Please can someone correct this piece of German writing?



I know its far from perfect but can someone please correct this piece of German Writing so I know where I have gone wrong. It would really be a massive help.

Mein lieblingsessen ist pizza und pommes weil es ist sehr lecker obwohl sehr ungesund, Ich esse nicht gern fisch weil ich finde das ekelhaft. ***Ich auch...
Any German person could understand with no problems, but there are grammar mistakes. For one, all Nouns in German start with a Capital-Letter. I've also correct the word order, added the umlauts and corrected the adjective endings. A good effort and I'm sure you'll learn the finer points of word order and adjective endings as you progress with learning German :-)   

  

Mein Lieblingsessen ist Pizza und Pommes, weil sie sehr lecker - obwohl sehr ungesund - sind. Ich esse nicht gern Fisch, weil ich ihn ekelhaft finde. Auch esse ich jeden Tag drei Stück Obst und Gemüse, um gesund zu bleiben. Ich rauche nie, weil ich es eine Geldverschwendung finde, und es riecht schlecht. Ich trinke manchmal Alkohol, weil es entspannend ist, obwohl er sehr schlecht fur die Gesundheit sein kann.   

  

Ich bewege mich drei Tage pro Woche. Jeden Montag früh gehe ich Schwimmen mit meiner Schule; es ist ermüdend, weil ich um halb 6 aufwachen muss. Jeden Mittwoch nach der Schule gehe ich in die Sporthalle für eine Stunde, aber ich denke, dass ich länger bleiben muss. Samstag Mittags gehe ich ins Sportzentrum, um Tennis mit meinen Freunden zu spielen; das macht viel Spaß und es ist gut, fit zu bleiben. Auch jeden Morgen fahre ich mit meinem Fahrrad in die Schule; das ist gut, weil ich nie spät bin. Ich sollte mehr Sport treiben, um fit zu bleiben.   

  

Letzes Wochenende am Samstag habe ich Fußball mit meinen Freunden gespielt. Ich bin drei Stunden geblieben, bevor ich und nach Hause zurückgegangen bin. Ich habe kein Fastfood gegessen, aber ich habe fünf Stück Obst und Gemüse pro Tag gegessen, weil ***ich auf meinen Kalorien achten musste. (this has already been mentioned above)   

  

Ich denke, dass Ernährungsgewohnheiten in Großbritannien allgemein schlecht sind, weil es so viele Fastfood-Restaurants und zu viele übergewichtige Kinder gibt. Alkohol ist auch schlecht für die Ernährung, und ist das größte Problem für Jugendliche, weil er legal ist, und auch weil es schwer aufzugeben ist, wenn all seine Freunde auch trinken. Leute bewegen sich nicht genug, und sie sollten nicht so viel fernsehen oder Computer spielen.
Hi Qiunnn,
it´s confusing, I know :-(
Try to think of it like this
Kein - you use it when you talk about things. "Deine Frau isst keinen Käse, kein Stück" Cheese has a mass, is something
nicht - you use it when you talk about feelings or actions. "Du sprichst nicht" " Du schläfst nicht (action)" aber "Du machst kein Auge zu (an eye is a thing)". In both sentences you say that you can´t sleep but in different ways.
No rule is perfect but with this little memory hook you say it most of the time right.


greez Angel


PS. there´s one more "little" thing. Like I said no rule is perfekt.
When you use a noun than it´s unfortunately different. Nouns like trouble fear ect.
for example
Ich will niemanden ärgern/verärgern (action) BUT Ich will keinen Ärger machen.
Ich will dich nicht ängstigen (action) BUT Ich will Dir keine Angst machen.
or more difficult
Ich will dir nicht weh tun BUT Ich will Dir keinen Schmerz bereiten.
I hope, I didn´t confuse you even more^^ thinly slice, sauté in some butter and oil, season with salt and pepper, and enjoy! you could also add slices of them to a lasagna (a great way to 'hide' vegetables for non-vegetables eaters), or grate them and add to meatloaf to keep the loaf nice and juicy. for a sweet application, make zucchini bread! i made a batch almost every weekend. My college roommate once took a shit while eating a liverwurst sandwich. Not sure why the specific type of sandwich bugs me so much, but it does. das Huhn is singular, die Hühner is plural. Hähnchen is fried chicken and Hühnchen can refer either to a young chicken or roast chicken. In addition, "mit jemand ein Hühnchen zu rupfen haben" means to have a bone to pick with someone or an axe to grind. not really. but i would let her taste it. lol. like the other day, i cooked food for me to munch on. and asked her if she wanted some. she said no. i made her some anyways. but did not give it to her right away. when i set beside her on the couch. i said taste this. she said omg i whish you made me some. so i gave her my bowl. and got up and got the other. she was like, yeah you get me. lol. Sie is the standard formal form. In the past (lets say you read texts older than 50 years) Ihr was also used as formal form.


<http://wiktionary.de/> helps with your second question. Easiest way to look at them is to use the infinite (as mögen, haben, etc.). You can also search for inflections (as möchte, hast, etc.). This will lead you to the infinite page anyway. On the infinite page, theres this table and at the end of the table is a link that will show all inflections. i mean, eating pork is extremely common in the united states. just about as common as beef and chicken. but it's not like we put it in everything, and you'll know if it's in something. so if you don't want to eat it, you can easily avoid it. and of course, there are practicing jews and muslims in the u. s. that do just that. not to mention people who don't eat meat anyway. although i've never heard of christians or non-religious people who ate other kinds of meat, but specifically not pork. yes dear eat hard boiled eggs or omlete as you wish but don't eat soft boiled eggs.. hdavid57: 
the ugly truth is that we are not the same. the goal should be to better accept and appreciate our differences instead of trying to make everyone else into carbon copies of ourselves.
yes, and these differences are called culture. when i lived in spain, i often wondered how countries like germany and austria entered into a political and economic union with countries like spain and greece. they are simply too different.
i think the fact that american's are able to celebrate differences is one of the reasons why our country is so successful. it's a plus for me. i love it when a guy knows how to cook. all guys should be able to cook. that meal in the pic looks very appetizing 😍