anchor.diff:  This would allow you to restrict access to data, while allowing deployment operators freer access to
   the BOSH Director.
   
  +The IaaS used in this example is vSphere.
  +
   ### <a id=""></a> Set up the IaaS ###
   
  -You collect the information about your vSphere and vCenter that you need to configure the environment.
  +Collect the information about your vSphere and vCenter that you need to configure the environment.
   
   This includes:
   
   * The names for your datacenter, datastore, cluster, resource pool, and network.
   * The IP addresses for your vCenter and network gateway.
  -* The IP addresses for the VMs to be deployed, called static IP addresses
  +* The IP addresses for the VMs to be deployed, called static IP addresses.
   * The range of IP addresses of your network.
   * The range of IP addresses that you want to reserve.
   These, and the static IPs, are off-limits to BOSH when BOSH needs to dynamically use an IP address for tasks like compilation.
  -You always reserve the IP of the MicroBOSH that deploys BOSH.
  +Always reserve the IP of the MicroBOSH that deploys BOSH.
   
   ### <a id=""></a> Create the manifest ###
   
  -Create the manifest to reflect the desired orchestration of the environment along with the network configuration information
  -for your IaaS.
  +The manifest should incorporate the network configuration information for your IaaS.
  +It should also reflect the way you want to orchestrate the deployment across the multiple VMs.
  +
  +For a suggestion about where to create the manifest and run BOSH deployment commands, see [Deploying MicroBOSH](./deploy-microbosh.html).
  +
  +BOSH deploys VMs in the order listed in the manifest.
  +In this case you need to list the data-storing VM first, because the other VM has the BOSH Director.
  +The Blobstore, Redis, and Postgres all need to be up and running before the Director.
  +
  +Use the **properties** block in the manifest to specify ephemeral disk (this is a vSphere-specific usage).
  +
   Refer to the [example manifest](#example-manifest) at the end of this topic.
   
   ### <a id=""></a> Download stemcell and release from public site ###
   
  -You download the latest release of BOSH, and a stemcell suitable for your preferred combination of IaaS and VM type.
  +You [download](http://bosh-artifacts.cfapps.io/) the latest release of BOSH, and a stemcell suitable for your preferred combination of IaaS and VM type.
   In this example, these are:
   
   * The **bosh-2131** release
   * The **vsphere esxi centos** stemcell
   
  -**Note**: This is only an example, so you can expect release numbers to be out of date by the time you read this.
  +**Note**: Release numbers given in this example may be out of date by the time you read this.
   
   ### <a id=""></a> Target and log into MicroBOSH ###
   
  
positive.code:     resurrector_enabled: true
  
    dns:
      address: 172.16.69.232
      recursor: 10.80.130.1
      db: *bosh_db
  
    vcenter:
      address: 172.16.69.3
      user: root
      password: vmware
      datacenters:
  
negative.code:   networks:
    - name: default
      static_ips:
      - 192.168.1.233
  
  - name: bosh_api
    template:
  