             @div class: 'welcome-detail', =>
               @p =>
                 @img class: 'welcome-img', src: 'atom://welcome/assets/package.svg'
-              @p '''A great thing about Atom is that you can install packages which add new features and functionality fitting your needs. Let's install one.'''
+              @p '''
+                  One of the best things about Atom is the package ecosystem.
+                  Installing packages adds new features and functionality you
+                  can use to make the editor suit your needs. Let's install one.
+                '''
               @p =>
                 @button outlet: 'packagesButton', class: 'btn btn-primary', 'Open Installer'
               @p class: 'welcome-note', =>
-                 @raw '<strong>Next time:</strong> You can install new packages in the settings.'
+                 @raw '<strong>Next time:</strong> You can install new packages from the settings.'
 
           # Themes
           @details class: 'welcome-card', 'data-section': 'themes', =>

              @p '''Atom comes with preinstalled themes. Let's try a few.'''
              @p =>
                @button outlet: 'themesButton', class: 'btn btn-primary', 'Open the theme picker'
              @p '''You can also try out themes created by the Atom community. To install new themes, click on "+ Install" and switch the toggle to "themes".'''
              @p class: 'welcome-note', =>
                 @raw '<strong>Next time:</strong> You can switch themes in the settings.'

          # Styling
          @details class: 'welcome-card', 'data-section': 'styling', =>

            @div class: 'welcome-detail', =>
              @p =>
                @img class: 'welcome-img', src: 'atom://welcome/assets/code.svg'
              @p '''
                  The init script is a bit of JavaScript or CoffeeScript run at
                  startup. You can use it to quickly change the behaviour of
                  Atom.
                '''
              @p =>
                @button outlet: 'initScriptButton', class: 'btn btn-primary', 'Open your Init Script'
              @p '''Uncomment some of the examples or try out your own.'''
              @p class: 'welcome-note', =>
                 @raw '<strong>Next time:</strong> You can open your init script from Menu > Atom.'

          # Snippets
          @details class: 'welcome-card', 'data-section': 'snippets', =>
