 
     bullet
       point_style: 'bullet'
-      strong: "Collect opinions on specific ideas"
-      body: ", proposals, plans, or hypotheticals. Even job candidates, products, or designs."
+      strong: "Focus on specific ideas"
+      body: ". Collect opinions on proposals, plans, hypotheticals, job candidates, products, designs, and more."
 
     bullet
       point_style: 'bullet'
       strong: "Foster considerate interactions"
-      body: """. The interface focuses people on considering all sides 
-                 of the topic, rather than each other. There is little 
-                 opportunity for personal attacks and trolling.
+      body: """. The interface orients people to consider the topic, 
+               rather than responding directly to each other. The design limits 
+               opportunities for personal attacks on others.
             """
 
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        style: _.extend h1,
          margin: '50px 0'

        'Focused discussion for your'
        BR null,
        'community, organization or classroom'


      Video()


    bullet
      point_style: 'bullet'
      strong: "Involve five, fifty, or even hundreds of people in deliberation"
      body: ". All voices can be heard without becoming overwhelming."

    bullet
      point_style: 'bullet'
