     icon: 'doc'
     strong: 'Collect feedback'
     body: """
-          You have a draft plan or policy. Or an idea for a new product direction, 
-          architecture, or design. Consider.it can help you gather organized 
-          feedback from anyone you invite to participate. Improve your idea 
-          with the insights of others, without having to sort through a long 
-          email chain.
+          You have a draft proposal. Maybe it’s a plan, a policy, or an idea for
+          a new product direction. Whatever it may be, Consider.it can help you 
+          gather organized feedback from anyone you invite to participate. 
+          Improve your proposal with the insights of others, without having to 
+          sort through a long email chain. 
           """
   }, {
     icon: 'crossroads'

        style: _.extend {}, h1,
          color: 'white'

        'What can you do better with Consider.it?'

      for u, idx in uses
        use _.extend {}, u, 

    icon: 'public'
    strong: "Engage the public"
    body: """
          Enable constituents to provide input on an upcoming decision. Consider.it 
          organizes this feedback into a guide to public thought that can be used 
          to refine the proposal or target common misconceptions during outreach. 
          """

  }, {
    icon: 'meeting'
    strong: 'Conduct meetings'
    body: """
          Plan more effective meetings by creating agendas on Consider.it. Thresh 
          through ideas before a meeting. After a meeting, use Consider.it to 
          close the loose ends!
          """
  }
]
