I'm writing a review of Richard Lanham's [*Revising Prose*](https://rads.stackoverflow.com/amzn/click/com/0205309453).

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> *Revising Prose* provides detailed examples and tutorials that will help you clarify, simplify, and make your writing more concise.
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What word can I use to replace "make your writing more concise"?