doc: review edit for enable_laag_secure_boot
Review update to PR
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Generate keys
For formal case, key generation and management can be referenced by:
`Ubuntu-KeyGeneration`_ or `Windows-secure-boot-key-creation-and-management-guidance`_.
-For testing, the keys can be created on the KBL NUC by below commands:
+For testing, the keys can be created on the KBL NUC with these commands:
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@@ -59,7 +59,8 @@ The keys to sign bootloader or kernel: **db.key**, **db.crt**
Create virtual disk to hold the keys
====================================
-Follow below commands to create virtual disk and copy keys:
+Follow these commands to create a virtual disk and copy the keys
+generated above:
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@@ -76,8 +77,8 @@ Follow below commands to create virtual disk and copy keys:
Enroll keys in OVMF
===================
-#. Customize the ``launch_uos.sh`` script to boot with the virtual disk which
- contains the keys for enrollment:
+#. Customize the ``launch_uos.sh`` script to boot with the virtual disk
+ that contains the keys for enrollment:
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@@ -235,7 +236,7 @@ Follow these commands to sign the Clear Linux VM binaries.
Boot Clear Linux signed image
*****************************
-#. Modify the ``launch_uos.sh`` script to use signed image.
+#. Modify the ``launch_uos.sh`` script to use the signed image.
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@@ -265,9 +266,11 @@ Boot Clear Linux signed image
#. Type ``exit`` to enter Bios configuration.
-#. Navigate to the **Boot Manager** and select **UEFI Misc Device** to boot signed Clear Linux image.
+#. Navigate to the **Boot Manager** and select **UEFI Misc Device** to
+ boot the signed Clear Linux image.
-#. Log in as root and use ``dmesg`` to check the secure boot status on User VM.
+#. Login as root and use ``dmesg`` to check the secure boot status on
+ the User VM.
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