doc:  PG 13 release note adjustments, Justin Pryzby v2
Reported-by: Justin Pryzby
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ Allow BEFORE row-level triggers on partitioned tables (&Aacute;lvaro Herrera)
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-These triggers "cannot change which partition is the destination.
+These triggers cannot change which partition is the destination.
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@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ Allow skipping of WAL for new tables and indexes if wal_level is 'minimal' (Noah
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-The WAL write amount where this happens is controlled by wal_skip_threshold.
+Relations larger than wal_skip_threshold will have their files fynsced rather than writing their WAL records.
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@@ -801,7 +801,8 @@ Improve control of prepared statement parameter logging (Alexey Bashtanov, &Aacu
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-The GUC setting log_parameter_max_length controls the maximum length of parameter values output during statement logging, and log_parameter_max_length_on_error allows parameters to be output on
+The GUC setting log_parameter_max_length controls the maximum length of parameter values output during statement non-error logging, and log_parameter_max_length_on_error does the same for error statement logging.
+Previously, prepared statement parameters were not logged during errors.
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@@ -943,7 +944,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
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-Allow track_activity_query_size to be set to 1MB (Vyacheslav Makarov)
+Allow track_activity_query_size to be set up to 1MB (Vyacheslav Makarov)
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@@ -2245,7 +2246,11 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akapila@postgresql.org>
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-Add parallel control of the vacuumdb command using --parallel (Masahiko Sawada)
+Allow vacuum commands run by vacuumdb to operate in parallel mode (Masahiko Sawada)
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+This is enabled with the new --parallel option.
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