Add some missing spaces, and reword a few phrases
static const char* WelcomeText =
"TIC-80 is a fantasy computer for making, playing and sharing tiny games.\n\n"
- "There are built-in tools for development: code, sprites, maps, sound editors and the command line, "
+ "It has built-in tools for development: code, sprites, maps, sound editors and the command line, "
"which is enough to create a mini retro game.\n"
- "At the exit you will get a cartridge file, which can be stored and played on the website.\n\n"
- "Also, the game can be packed into a player that works on all popular platforms and distribute as you wish.\n"
- "To make a retro styled game the whole process of creation takes place under some technical limitations: "
- "240x136 pixels display, 16 color palette, 256 8x8 color sprites, 4 channel sound and etc.";
+ "In the end, you will get a cartridge file, which can be stored and played on the website.\n\n"
+ "Also, the game can be packed into a player that works on all popular platforms and distributed as you wish.\n"
+ "To make a retro-style game, the whole creation process takes place under some technical limitations: "
+ "240x136 pixels display, 16 color palette, 256 8x8 color sprites, 4 channel sound, etc.";
static const struct SpecRow {const char* section; const char* info;} SpecText1[] =
{
@@ -1111,7 +1111,7 @@ static void onNewCommandConfirmed(Console* console)
done = true;
}
- if(done) printBack(console, "\nnew cart is created");
+ if(done) printBack(console, "\nnew cart has been created");
else printError(console, "\ncart not created");
commandDone(console);
