Edited changes.xml for the 1.25.0 release.
@@ -57,14 +57,14 @@ application restart control.
<change type="feature">
<para>
-client IP address replacement from specified HTTP header field.
+client IP address replacement from a specified HTTP header field.
</para>
</change>
<change type="bugfix">
<para>
-TLS connection was rejected for configuration with more than one
-certificate bundle in a listener if a client did not use SNI.
+TLS connections were rejected for configurations with multiple
+certificate bundles in a listener if the client did not use SNI.
</para>
</change>
@@ -72,13 +72,13 @@ certificate bundle in a listener if a client did not use SNI.
<change type="bugfix">
<para>
the router process could crash on TLS connection open when multiple listeners
-with TLS certificate configured; the bug had appeared in 1.23.0.
+with TLS certificates were configured; the bug had appeared in 1.23.0.
</para>
</change>
<change type="bugfix">
<para>
-the router process could crash on rapid mutithreaded application
+the router process could crash with frequent mutithreaded application
reconfiguration.
</para>
</change>
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ a full-form IPv6 in a listener address.
<change type="bugfix">
<para>
-compatibility issues with some Python ASGI apps, notably based on Starlette
+compatibility issues with some Python ASGI apps, notably based on the Starlette
framework.
</para>
</change>
