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diff: # Advanced Invoke Azure Function Check Example
  -This advanced example shows an Azure Function that checks that an [Azure Boards](https://azure.microsoft.com/products/devops/boards/) work item referenced by the commit that triggered a pipeline run is completed.
  +This advanced example shows how to trigger an Azure Function to fire once a pipeline run ends that was kicked off by a commit with a related [Azure Boards](https://azure.microsoft.com/products/devops/boards/) work item.
  -You should use this Azure Function in an [`Invoke Azure Function` check](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/devops/pipelines/process/approvals?#invoke-azure-function) configured in **Callback (Asynchronous)** mode. This mode is ideal when evaluating a condition takes a while, for example, due to making a REST call.
  +Use the [`Invoke Azure Function` check](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/devops/pipelines/process/approvals?#invoke-azure-function) Azure Function in **Callback (Asynchronous)** mode. This mode is ideal for conditions that can have longer wait times (example: making a REST call).
  To successfully run this example, you need to have an Azure Boards work item, an Azure Repo, and a YAML pipeline.
  @@ -12,23 +12,23 @@ The Azure Function goes through the following steps:
  1. Confirms the receipt of the check payload
  2. Sends a status update to Azure Pipelines that the check started
  -3. Retrieves the Azure Boards ticket referenced in the commit that triggered the pipeline run
  -4. Checks if the ticket is in the `Completed` state
  +3. Retrieves the Azure Boards work item referenced in the commit that triggered the pipeline run
  +4. Checks if the work item is in the `Completed` state
  5. Sends a status update with the result of the check
  -6. If the ticket isn't in the `Completed` state, it reschedules another evaluation in 1 minute
  -7. Once the ticket is in the correct state, it sends a positive decision to Azure Pipelines
  +6. If the work item isn't in the `Completed` state, the function will run again in one minute
  +7. Once the ticket is in the correct state, the function sends a positive decision to Azure Pipelines
  The example consists of two Azure Functions working together:
  -1. `AzureFunctionAdvancedHandler` that is entry point for the check process
  -2. `AzureFunctionAdvancedServiceBusTrigger` that performs the periodic check of the state of the work item
  +1. `AzureFunctionAdvancedHandler` is the entry point for the check process
  +2. `AzureFunctionAdvancedServiceBusTrigger` performs the periodic check of the state of the work item
  These two functions interact over a [ServiceBus queue](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/azure-functions/functions-bindings-service-bus?tabs=in-process%2Cextensionv5%2Cextensionv3&pivots=programming-language-csharp) named `az-advanced-checks-queue`. If the work item isn't completed,
  -`AzureFunctionAdvancedHandler` queues a message to this queue. The message becomes active in `{ChecksEvaluationPeriodInMinutes}` minutes (by default, 1 minute), and it triggers `AzureFunctionAdvancedServiceBusTrigger`. The function consumes the message and removes it from the queue. This is how we reschedule another evaluation in 1 minute (Step 6).
  +`AzureFunctionAdvancedHandler` queues a message to this queue. The message becomes active in `{ChecksEvaluationPeriodInMinutes}` minutes (by default, 1 minute), and it triggers `AzureFunctionAdvancedServiceBusTrigger`. The function then consumes the message and removes it from the queue. The function will then be scheduled for a second evaluation in one minute (Step 6).
  # Configuration
  -Follow these instructions to use this example as an `Invoke Azure Function` check:
  +To use this example as an `Invoke Azure Function` check:
  1. Create and configure a ServiceBus named `azchecks`
  2. Within the ServiceBus, create and configure the ServiceBus queue namede `az-advanced-checks-queue`
  ![ServiceBus Queue](Pictures/ServiceBusQueue.png?raw=true)
  