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WalletWasabi.Fluent/Views/AddWallet/WelcomePageView.axaml
WalletWasabi.Fluent/Views/AddWallet/WelcomePageView.axaml
<!-- Welcome to Wasabi -->
<Grid ColumnDefinitions="*,*">
<DockPanel Grid.Column="0" Grid.Row="0" VerticalAlignment="Center">
- <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="Satoshi brought us scarcity, Wasabi is bringing us fungibility. As inflation is running rampant, vigilant individuals are opting out. Bitcoin is rapidly becoming the world's reserve currency, but its fungibility - a property of good money - is still unsatisfactory. Wasabi Wallet is a bastion of hope in the quest to qualitatively improve the money of our future." />
+ <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="Satoshi brought scarcity, while Wasabi is bringing fungibility. As inflation is running rampant, vigilant individuals are opting out. Bitcoin is rapidly becoming the world's reserve currency, but its fungibility - a property of good money - is still unsatisfactory. Wasabi Wallet is a bastion of hope in the quest to qualitatively improve the money of the future." />
<TextBlock Text="Welcome to Wasabi"
Classes="title" />
<Viewbox Classes="icon">
<!-- Trustless by design -->
<Grid ColumnDefinitions="*,*">
<DockPanel Grid.Column="0" Grid.Row="0" VerticalAlignment="Center">
- <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="If you don't control your private keys, then you are not the true owner of the funds. Wasabi is non-custodial: the developers cannot steal or freeze your funds." />
+ <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="If you don't control your private keys, then you are not the true owner of your funds. Wasabi is non-custodial: the developers cannot steal or freeze your funds." />
<TextBlock Text="Not Your Keys, Not Your Coins"
Classes="title" />
<Viewbox Classes="icon">
<!-- Anonymous -->
<Grid ColumnDefinitions="*,*">
<DockPanel Grid.Column="0" Grid.Row="0" VerticalAlignment="Center">
- <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="Wasabi protects your financial information through coinjoins, client side block filtering, and communicating over the Tor anonymity network. Neither the public nor the developers can breach your privacy." />
+ <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="Wasabi protects your financial information through coinjoins, client-side block filtering, and communication over the Tor anonymity network. Neither the public nor the developers can breach your privacy." />
<TextBlock Text="Always Be Coinjoining"
Classes="title" />
<Viewbox Classes="icon">
<!-- Free and Open Source -->
<Grid ColumnDefinitions="*,*">
<DockPanel Grid.Column="0" Grid.Row="0" VerticalAlignment="Center">
- <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="In order to ensure the code - that's running on your computer - can indeed protect you from the developers and from the public, Wasabi is free, open-source and deterministically reproducible software." />
+ <TextBlock Classes="text" Text="To ensure the code - running on your computer - can indeed protect you from the developers and the public, Wasabi is free, open-source and deterministically reproducible software." />
<TextBlock Text="Don't Trust Verify"
Classes="title" />
<Viewbox Classes="icon">

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