content: This story is about a girl named Tally and her new friend Shay. In Tally and Shay's world on your 16th birthday you get an extremely cool gift. No it's not your driver's license, it's to turn pretty. All of Tally's life she wanted to turn, but then she meet Shay. Shay knows someone named David, but David doesn't live in the city he lives in the wild. David and his parents know a secret about turning pretty and its not so pretty after all.I had some questions about my story. One of my questions was who is David and why doesn't he live in the city? Both my questions were answered and here's how: David is a boy who was born in the wild and grew up there. David had also never been in a city. David doesn't live in the city because his parents had run away because they found out the secret about becoming pretty.