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+0013cc385424,007ACE74B050,"Hi, i'm Isaac, i'm going to be writing about how this face on Mars is a natural landform or if there is life on Mars that made it. The story is about how NASA took a picture of Mars and a face was seen on the planet. NASA doesn't know if the landform was created by life on Mars, or if it is just a natural landform. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9704a709b505,007ACE74B050,"On my perspective, I think that the face is a natural landform because I dont think that there is any life on Mars. In these next few paragraphs, I'll be talking about how I think that is is a natural landform ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c22adee811b6,007ACE74B050,I think that the face is a natural landform because there is no life on Mars that we have descovered yet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a10d361e54e4,007ACE74B050,"If life was on Mars, we would know by now. The reason why I think it is a natural landform because, nobody live on Mars in order to create the figure. It says in paragraph 9, ""It's not easy to target Cydonia,"" in which he is saying that its not easy to know if it is a natural landform at this point. In all that they're saying, its probably a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db3e453ec4e2,007ACE74B050,People thought that the face was formed by alieans because they thought that there was life on Mars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+36a565e45db7,007ACE74B050,"though some say that life on Mars does exist, I think that there is no life on Mars. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+fb65fe816ba3,007ACE74B050,"It says in paragraph 7, on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin took a picture of Mars with his Orbiter Camera, that the face was a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e472e2584fa,007ACE74B050,"Everyone who thought it was made by alieans even though it wasn't, was not satisfied. I think they were not satisfied because they have thought since 1976 that it was really formed by alieans. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+28a94d3ee425,007ACE74B050,"Though people were not satified about how the landform was a natural landform, in all, we new that alieans did not form the face. I would like to know how the landform was formed. we know now that life on Mars doesn't exist. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d226f06362f5,00944C693682,"Limiting the usage of cars has personal and professional support all across the globe and yet it has yet to be embraced everywhere. Statistical proof show where it may help and real life examples of some of the effects of reducing, or getting rid of altogether, cars in one's daily life. While ""recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by"" (Source 4), is that really enough or for the right reason? There are plenty of reasons to stop, or limit, the amount of cars being driven on the roads for every kind of person, from the hippie to the businessman, from the mom to the college student. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+de347c859ab6,00944C693682,"With so many things in this world that few people agree on, this is a nice change to see in regards the removal of so many cars. Why would they all agree, one might ask. Well, there are plenty of reasons. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+cc921c5cfda4,00944C693682,stress. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6fcdd9110ab,00944C693682,"It is no secret that morning traffic jams and 5'o'clock traffic is often enough to send any driver into a fit of unadulterated rage and what better way is there to prevent that than to simply not drive at all? Mother and media trainer, Heidrum Walter attested to this after moving into a mostly car-less community, claiming ""when [she] had a car [she] was always tense. [She's] much happier [that] way"" (Source 1). If that were not enough, businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza who participated in the Day Without Cars in Bogota, Colombia, after just a day was able to say ""it's a good oppurtunity to take away stress"" (Source 3). Just one day was enough to de-stress this man and if that does not speak wonders, one has to wonder what does. The event ""[left] the streets of [Bogota] eerily devoid of traffic jams"" (Source 3), which goes to show how stressful it was everyday, with traffic jams a common occurance. No one enjoys them, so why continue to suffer through them? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6efd9102298b,00944C693682,the environment suffers greatly from the many car emissions let out on the roads. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d6807f31da92,00944C693682,"""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe ... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States"" (Source 1). This alone should be enough to horrify anyone out of such copious amounts of car usage. If that were not enough, ""transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions"" (Source 4). It is clear that cars are only doing more harm to this earth all humans live on and happen to only have one of, so there is no need to continue on knowing this without changing something about that. Even car-pooling could significantly reduce emissions as there would be less cars out there, which is possible through ""more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work"" (Source 4). 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+024f3edf0cdb,00944C693682,", adding the last two reasons together makes for another very important factor in all of this: everyone's general health. Both stress and high concentrations of smog can do a toll on one's body and the reduction of cars, once again, helps to reduce this terrible down-sides to the easy transportation option ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cf5dc6eb65e0,00944C693682,"If it must be described as ""emissions ... are choking cities"" (Source 1), then why not be a bit more concerned. Air pollution can affect those with pre-existing respitory issues and stress can be a deciding factor in how effient and well a person can function. Stress on the road can lead to unsafe driving and a worse performance at work, school, or any other task-oriented location that many go to with the aid of a car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8df2da9994bf,00944C693682,It is also worth noting that cities that have embraced a no car lifestyle such as Vauban or Bogota have generally improved as a community and have given back anything the newly car-less citizens may have been missing out on through saving them time and money. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+033845420f01,00944C693682,"In Vauban, ""stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway"" (Source 1). This is not only much more cost-efficient, but also convienent. This is saving both time and money, just like in Bogota where ""parks and sports centers [] have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up"" (Source 3). Not only does this help individual citizens and business owners, it helps the overall economy of the city as well. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9fd314f638e5,00944C693682,"Individual car use isn't bad. Millions of individuals using cars, however, is very bad. Note the emphasis. Even just making a concious effort to car pool, bike to work or school, use public transportation, or use some sort of alternative transportation could be enough to clear up the air of some of it's emissions, keep oneself and others happier and less stressed, save time and money, and improve their city all in one little decision. It's just a matter of going ahead and doing it, so what is stopping anyone from going out and making that change now? Be the change you want to see and limit your car usage now.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ed7e62a18bad,00BD97EA4041,Should computers read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c20937683442,00BD97EA4041,"No because, why should a computer know how your feeling? ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4faec979a617,00BD97EA4041,It wouldn't change the emotion the students feeling. It also wouldn't help with the students education. Its over all just a waste of time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a44371d6abc5,00BD97EA4041,"The process begins when the computer puts together a 3-D digital model. There are 44 major muscles in your face that the computer has to detect. Eckman classified six emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. He then "" associated each with characteristic movements of facial muscles.""
+
+For example the frontalis pars lateralis muscle is above your eye which shows your surpried when it is raised.
+
+Us humans alone can identify facial expressions on peoples faces. If you look at a friend you can tell how they are feeling at that moment. Da Vinci studied human anatomy to help paint the facial muscles percisely on the Mona Lisa painting. Dr. Huangs has new computer software it stores similar info as electronic code. He thinks there could be a different type of code to the painting. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9257d57eae0,00BD97EA4041,When facial facial expressions a made its about muscular action units. The school computer shouldn't have to know how you are feeling. What kind of problem is that supposed to solve ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a1e697d6488,00BD97EA4041,This idea is nothing but just a distraction for school students. It also may detect wrong facial expressions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af494e4e0b4f,00BD97EA4041,To conclusion computers in school shouldn't detect emotions of the students. I have proved my point on why it shouldn't be in school. I have given you several examples from the passage to prove this point. It shoudn't matter if the computer knows how your feeling.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d03e2bef0ff,00C6E82FE5BA,I think that it wouldn't be valueable to have technology be able to read emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cb1efb91bfe4,00C6E82FE5BA,the fact that its really easy for someone else to get into your phone or tablet through face reconition ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+095847b91399,00C6E82FE5BA,"People use face reconition alot and it can be a quicker way to get into your tablets and phones or any other electronics, but people can easily crack into the electronic and take any personal infomation that they need. I mean electonic ability to read people's emotions is cool and all, and its a huge next step into newer tecnology for the future, but the fact that you know say you needed to be happy to get into your phone, some one else can act happy and, well unlock your phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e7b0234ed72,00C6E82FE5BA,"In paragraph six the article talks about how they could make different ads show if you were happy or frowning. That could be good but if your watching, like youtube or videos and an ad shows, your going to want to keep watching your video and not the ad. If a person is watching a show and an ad pops up and they smile, then it shows another ad that the person didnt want to see because they wanted to keep watching thier show. I think people would be angry if that happen, because not a lot of people like ads ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+235278a2c6d7,00C6E82FE5BA,"Ads can be good for promotion of products, but i think we all know when your playing a game on your electronic device that you want to keep playing or watching and not the ad. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9c3b9503c9a4,00C6E82FE5BA,"The reasons why i said that this would be unvalueable is because the reason of security,like anything could go wrong because everything in technology can be unexpected. thats why i chose the reasons I did. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ed3a833a2f49,013B9AA6B9DB,What is that thing on Mars? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c2203a58aa5c,013B9AA6B9DB,"Well, some people believe that it was something made by aliens. I am here to prove that it was not. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+804266501124,013B9AA6B9DB,"The thing on Mars first was photographed in 1976. It is a huge rock formation that resembles a human face. There are shadows that give it the illusion that it has eyes, a nose, and a mouth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e0d25faca07,013B9AA6B9DB,Some believe that it is real evidence that there is life on Mars ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7a01d9cb379a,013B9AA6B9DB,well it is not. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a5e7a6893f7f,013B9AA6B9DB,"On April 5, 1998, the Mars Global Surveyor flew over the ""Face."" The new cameras snapped a photograph that was ten times sharper than the original one. The new image revealed that it was a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ac0ff39b989,013B9AA6B9DB,"Some skeptics said that maybe the alien markings were hidden by the clouds, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+244544e584aa,013B9AA6B9DB,but in 2001 a newer image was taken ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+effe61fb5d6e,013B9AA6B9DB,"This image was captured on a cloudless day, so there was nothing obstructing the view. This image also shows ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f286d4b669a,013B9AA6B9DB,"that the presumed face was a landform, and not the ancient work of aliens. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b199e5df1815,013B9AA6B9DB,"So, in conclusion, the famous face on Mars was a natural landform. This is supported by the pictures taken in 1998 and 2001. The image captured in 2001 could also possibly see other objects if there were any. So, the face not a sign of life on Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+55f4bc9b664b,0158970BC5D2,"Students around the world are forgetting more and more from their past school year, due to their long summer vacation. Because of this, many teachers are debating whether or not they should simply give students teacher-designed projects over the summer, or let the students design the projects themselves. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e713e8b20cf3,0158970BC5D2,summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f1d3e589dbbe,0158970BC5D2,easy plagiarism ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b8922c113c05,0158970BC5D2,teachers' knowledge on how to deisgn and grade a project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+96f2ff86c0f9,0158970BC5D2,"When i was in the 6th grade, for fun, our teacher assigned the class to design a volcano that had to shoot up as far as possible into the air, made with paper mache, glue, and other accessible materials. There wasn't much instruction on how to do the volcano, as long as we were the ones building it, and the idea/design was original. Most kids' volcanoes looked pretty amateur, with varying degrees of success. However, the kid whose volcano shot up the highest, was disqualified for copying his design and materials exactly from a project someone had shared on the internet.
+
+If a student can plagiarize someone's work from a project loosely designed by a teacher, then even more students can plagiarize a project that ""they themselves"" designed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d203548d9024,0158970BC5D2,"Often times throughout middle school, my teachers would give the students each other's assignments to grade themselves. And afterwards, we would see in the grade book that the grade changed because the students weren't grading the assignments the way they should have been. The student grading was meant to engage the classroom, but it turned into a showcase of how students dont really know how to grade the way teachers do. If students are unaware of how a project is supposed to be graded, they can not successfully design a project that tests whether or not they understand the material. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e55c28aa864c,0158970BC5D2,"Some people may say, ""but allowing students to design their own projects will allow them to focus more on their work during the summer."" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9eb4c757d0c3,0158970BC5D2,"Whenever I'm given a summer assignment, I know for a fact it I won't even look at the assignment until maybe about a few days before the first day of school. Which would lead to me rushing a lazily put together assignment and a not so good grade. Giving students the opportunity to design their own assignments will lead to students rushing their projects, and justifying it by claiming that the level of quality meets the standards of their assignment. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+03294d2fcc6a,0158970BC5D2,"It is important to keep students' minds engaged over the summer break, so they don't feel completely disoriented the following school year. I know from personal experience that the break between school years has left me disinterested in continuing to learn and work for the next school year. However, giving students teacher-designed assignments will stimulate their brains and keep them focused over the break. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a041886eec7c,015BB7DA58EE,"Have you ever been bored in a class room such as your highschool english classes? Well do to a brand new algorithum made by Dr. Paull Eckman, creator of the FACS(Facial Action Coding System), you can finaly be exited about learning about greek and latin roots. This program can detect how you are felling and in what precentages ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9cdb031bf4c9,015BB7DA58EE,In the following paragraphs they will talk about if we should or should not read students faces to make the classroom experience more enjoyable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+94d217778be6,015BB7DA58EE,Well to start off the technology has decoded the Mona Lisa smile ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c24890bd6f6a,015BB7DA58EE,"You know they one the smile that seams somewhat omanis when you look at it. well this program has determend that the paintings famous smile is mostly happy. The spcifics of the smile are as follows she's 83 precent happy, 9 precent disgusted, 6 precent fearful, and 2 precent angry. This computer software known as the FACS looks adn all 44 major mussles and then makes a decison based on that. How can this be helpfull to schools. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+162b862f7128,015BB7DA58EE,"Now if you actualy like doing greek and latin roots in your english class you may not need this new technology, However you may not like another class like math classes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f55d719a273,015BB7DA58EE,If we start doing eveything on computers like all of our lessons for example we will probably need this to keep us from not falling asleep during the class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a3369aa974c,015BB7DA58EE,"If we do end up adopting this new software into our computers it could make us have more fun lessons and make the classes end faster, well do to preception ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7da6d74a7627,015BB7DA58EE,If the technology could be used with just a webcam then you could just look at your students face and see if they are bored or off task and make the lesson more enjoyable. We could just look at the precentages of the kids facial expressions like how they found out how the Mona Lisa's smile was mostly happy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5431a13b4893,015BB7DA58EE,In conclution we could make our childrens classroom experiences more enjoyable. Even if it is a little creepy to have a software that watches you for your whole classroom experience. But it mostlikely is worth it to make shcool more enjoyable for the kids in them. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+15f46d6913df,0167BBA84E43,Do you really thing a land form could make a face ? To me that seems something is very unlikely. A planet that we do not look alike can make a face as a organism on earth? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+18e84569101a,0167BBA84E43,The photo isn't clearly shown as a face it just looks like a planets land form ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a348497d43c2,0167BBA84E43,"It may aslo be a feture that is only unique to this palnet like the moon has thousands of craders. I just feel as if Earth has all the water and green grass on it mayb Mars has these land forms instead. Also it might be like how people gaze at the stars or the clouds to see if they make an object or a human face. If you look closley you can see that the
+
+""face"" has ridges or canyon. So maybe the ridegs/canyons made the land form that way ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5983efd986b0,0167BBA84E43,NASA on the other hand and says there is likelyness of a human face. They also believe it is an alien artifac ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+9373ad480e79,0167BBA84E43,"According to the picture they say because of the shadows it portraies eyes, nose and mouth. They say that in the years that they took the picture it has developed more and more over the spands of years. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1f8daa23ba7,0167BBA84E43,"In conclusion the ""face'' to me is still just a land form. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d64021d415d7,0167BBA84E43,Just because it looks as if it is something could not just be made out of a human face. If they had more evidence then it would be believeable but until then my opnion is still that it is a land form.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+218bfd96197d,0168325D0E24,"Being in a car is how we transport ourselves to and from places. Now what would you do if you had to give up your car. Yes, some people didnt mind giving up their cars but not everyone would be ok with this. We have gotten so used to driving cars that i don't know what some people would do if they had to give up their means of transportation. Its also another factored that what if someone had to drive a long ways, it would take them even longer to get where they're going. Its a very serious topic when you think of how much time one person spends in a car. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+599e5e16e9ed,0168325D0E24,"Well Paris has enforced a driving ban to help clear the air of pollution. ""On mondays motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day."" Many people, in Paris, were fined for driving on the wrong day. Paris wanted to do something about the smog that was surrounding their beautiful city, so they figured if there wasnt as many cars polluting the air then the smog would go away. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a398be97f2b7,0168325D0E24,It actually helped having cars stop driving on certain days because the smog actually cleared. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38a6679de2ed,0168325D0E24,"""Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by."" American has always had a thing for cars but lately that seems to be a false statement. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1cc93a81a32,0168325D0E24,"In the more populated citys, people are using more bikes and less cars. Its easier to get around a city where there are thousands of people on the streets alone. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1e8d962ccf47,0168325D0E24,"Internet maybe a huge reason why theres less dringing because it feels like your more connected with your friends and family without actually having to go anywhere. The need for cars in the U.S. has gone down dramadically. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+417f54b08a30,0168325D0E24,"Ever been to a place where there are no cars aloud. Well in Vauban, Germany there is a place where if you want to go there you have to give up your car. ""Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden is this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg."" People are happier without the stress of a car says Heidrun Walter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc6acebcd4c0,0168325D0E24,"This is a place for clean air and no pollution from the car fumes. As of right now, this experiment seems to be running quite nicely. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6d9d88dcdb54,0168325D0E24,"In all actuality, how many people dont realize how long they spend of their life in a car? If one day all cars in the world were banned, how would everyone recate? Some people may want to give up their cars, some people may not want to give up their cars ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d4e5221d31d2,0168325D0E24,"There are many sides to people giving up their cars. Some people are truly happy and some are not. It may not be that bad, i mean how did people manige before cars were even invented ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+40556d737dae,0168325D0E24,"In one acrtical, it say there is a place where no cars are aloud but it also says that that place is an experimental project. In the end cars are just no as popular as they used to be. is that a good or bad thing, you decide.                ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+268da7edc231,01AFC67DF935,"President Obama has done nothing to improve our society.  If anything, he has created the worst society this world has ever seen. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2afcaec42c9c,01AFC67DF935,"Limiting our usage of any type of motorized vehicle, would not only decrease air pollution but it would also help with adults or children that may not exercise enough.  ",Position,Adequate,,,
+af569f0ddf09,01AFC67DF935,"Also when riding in or driving a motorized vehicle, your could get into an accident.  Getting into an accident in a vehicle could have much more fatal result than you walking, jogging, or even riding a bicycle. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+917cc7fc5ca4,01AFC67DF935,"Although walking, jogging, or riding a bicycle isnt must safer than riding in a vehicle.  ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4e718381101b,01AFC67DF935,"You could be walking along when a stranger may walk up out of nowhere, beat you up, and could hurt you very badly.  They may also take your wallet/purse.  Depending on who the person is, you could end up with a black eye, cut or busted lip/eye, or anything miner; while if the wrong person gets ahold of you, you could end up in the hospital needing surgery, transplant of some sort, or could even loose your life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2a95e4cd114,01AFC67DF935,"Also, owning a car could could put someone in debt.  ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0adaf1d049b4,01AFC67DF935,"Falling behind on payments could be devastating to you and your family.  When the car company comes to reposses your vehicle, you could end up having to walk, jog, or even ride a bike. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+826b1039775a,01AFC67DF935,So whether you like it or not everything has consequences.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c59442be6db,01B52B1D14F8,"So, in the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to indentify human emotions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3f45cda4e0b0,01B52B1D14F8,After reading the article I really could'nt decide. When reading about the FACS the first thing that came to my mind was to use this technology on the faces of celeberties. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6ba8f4c85956,01B52B1D14F8,Well it's because it would be fun to do so. In my opinion that's what it's most useful for in classrooms. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a0d92309806,01B52B1D14F8,Sure the teacher could use this technology to teach students about how advanced the humans have become but.. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e890c3ba9d81,01B52B1D14F8,Imagine being a teacher and then one day you introduce the FACS to your students. What do you think the first thing they do would be? I think the first thing they would do is take selfies and let the FACS analyze thier face. Then they laugh at the results. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9be259b07fa,01B52B1D14F8,See they are doing it for fun. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9732378cc532,01B52B1D14F8,"This reminds me of disecting frogs in biology. Some students think it's useful for your education while some other students think it's a waste of time, a waste of life for the frogs and that disecting them in the first place is already digusting. But do they do this for fun. NO they don't. They do it to learn about the oragns of the frogs and the purpose of each organ. But is disecting frogs valuable? Yes in my opinion. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7d71dae9cdbf,01B52B1D14F8,"So, no I don't think it's classroom valuable to use FACS. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b2dc14b0cafc,01B52B1D14F8,But that dosen't mean that you should not let them try it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+19b8004b9213,01B52B1D14F8,"Here's what the teachers should do. They show the students a picture of someones face. Lets just say for example Mona Lisa. The students will stare at the picture for about a minute carefully looking at every part of Mona Lisa's face. Then the students will decide Mona Lisa's emotion by rating her happiness, sadness, anger, digust or any other kind of emotions. Then after that the teacher uses the FACS on Mona Lisa's face to see if the results for Mona Lisa's emotions from the technology is the same as the results from the students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c154a240940d,01B52B1D14F8,Human vs Technology there you go.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4a7d11406893,01E9D9CD5CBF,"The study the ability of humans to read subatle changesin facial expressions, thast they appiled reverse correlation technique to reveal visual features that mediate understanding of emotion expressed by the face. Suprising finding were that (1) the noise added to test face image had profound effect on the facail expression and (2) in most every istance the new expression was meaningful.
+
+All 44 major muscles in the mode must move like human muslces. Movemment of one or more mucles is called an ""action unit"" Then Dr. Pual Eckam, creator of (FACS) Ekman has classified six basic emotions- happeniess, suprise, anger, disgust, feat and sadness. In the text it states,""The soft wear is the latest innovatiobn from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institiute for Advance Science at the University of
+
+Illinois."" Dr. Huag and colleague are experts at developing better ways fo humans and computers to communicate. The faical expressions for each emotion are univeral, observers Dr. Huang, even thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression (like smiling broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recqizing softwear facture these movements.
+
+The study the ability of humans to read subatle changesin facial expressions, thast they appiled reverse correlation technique to reveal visual features that mediate understanding of emotion expressed by the face. The process begins whwne the computer constructs a 3-D comupter Model. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6d6e1d40b9b1,01E9D9CD5CBF,"The study the ability of humans to read subatle changesin facial expressions, thast they appiled reverse correlation technique to reveal visual features that mediate understanding of emotion expressed by the face. Facial expression not only expresses emtions but also even help reproduce them. The thought of making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bbd2ffd5524f,01F69867D1BE,Have you ever ever been required to do a summer project that your not intreasted in? Certain schools in America require students to complete summer projects to ensure they are still learning over break. Students are often assined teacher designed projects. While most students complete these over summer projects many students don't due to lack of intrest in the assined topic. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+d149f0653fd1,01F69867D1BE,To improve student input schools should move towards student designed projects so students will be more intrested and and involved in the project. ,Position,Effective,,,
+d9f3089308c7,01F69867D1BE,"While a summer project is not something most students would like to do over there break, teachers could allow there students to choose a topic or unit to base there project on. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+199aea4ae355,01F69867D1BE,Students can use this to there advantage and choose a topic they were intreasted. Students could learn and still enjoy working on the project. Students also have an easier time working on topics that they have knowledge on allowing them to complete there work easily. Students can take advantage of being able to design there own project and choose a topic or unit that they struggled on through out the year. Working on these weak points can strengthen your skills for next school year. Students can go back and look at past notes and worksheets helping improve there skills in that topic. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a1cca1e1142,01F69867D1BE,"Students being able to design there projects could allow the student to create something they enjoy doing over the summer with friends and family, rather then students thinking of it as another teacher assined project that is boring ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f4416adbb49e,01F69867D1BE,Instead they can create something that they think of as fun but still educates them. They could also use this project to study or learn upcoming cirriculum for next year. This would allow the student to get a head start on future units and topics. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a19c3831933,01F69867D1BE,"
+Overall schools that require summer break projects should move towards student designed projects over teacher designed ones. When students have the ability to choose from certain topics and units they can decide what is best for them. Using the project to work on material that they were intrested in through out the year and want to further research and learn about or use the oppurtunity to study material that the student had trouble with over the school year so that they can be caught up for next year. Furthermore students can create projects that will help them with future cirriculum for next year. In conclusion schools should use student designed projects because it allows the student to choose how they want to utilize the time for either further studying a topic, going back and reviewing areas they had trouble in or learning future topics for next school year. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8ce8856c5e66,021663FD2F2E,"In The article ""Making The Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto how the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5fabd9b3a221,021663FD2F2E,this new technology is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d1c5f0d13151,021663FD2F2E,"The Mona lisa demonstration really intended to bring a smile to your face this while just imagine how a computer knows when you're happy or sad thats crazy. For example, if you smile as soon as a web ad appears on the screen another ad will follow. Lets say that you frown the next ad will be different from the one you smiled on. Another thing a classroom computer can know when students are becoming to be confused or bored.
+
+How the start of the porcess is when the computer contracts a 3-D computer model of the face all of the 44 major muscles on the model must have move like human muscles. Eckamn has classified six emotions for example anger, surprise, fear, sadness and happiness. Movement for more than one muscle is called a unit.
+
+In fact us human perfrom this impressive called calculation we use it everyday. For example, you could tell how your friend is feeling by looking at his or her face. most us would have trouble describing each others facial trit that makes us happy or worried. Yet Dr. Huang observes artist like Leonardo Da Vinci he studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles to have enough convey specific type of emoitions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da54c636c445,021663FD2F2E,However the new technology is valuable by telling you how what are your human emotions. For example a classroom computer can show when a student is bored or getting confused. Also it can classified six different motions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73c183f965dd,021663FD2F2E,Therefore this New technology is valuable for the students in classrooms.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f6c1cbd86aff,022EE73C4244,"Almost every student knows the dread of going back to school. The easy and laid back summer fads out and suddenly it's back to the old grind. The sleeping in till noon goes back to waking up at six, bathing suits get put back in the closet, and the sun tans fade. Yet, almost every student can relate to the one thing that always keeps them tied to school during the summer, the dreaded summer assignment. It could be a book report or a math packet, either way it burns in the back of their minds while they cannonball into pools. It seeps into thoughts while they try to fall asleep. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+fe37cadc0c6b,022EE73C4244,"If teachers gave students the opportunity to discover their own work, and maybe even a passion, students work would be of a higher quality and it might actually have them excited to go back to school. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5ac75720d785,022EE73C4244,"When someone decidedly does not like something, you can't force them to like it, no matter how hard you try. That is what it can feel like for students when teachers assign work that is not interesting to them over and over again. There is no way for every part of classwork to interest students, but teachers could make an effort to make the one assignment that no one wants to do over the summer, interesting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+315a20da8ef8,022EE73C4244,"When students have the ability to decide what they will study in a project, they are more excited and more willing to get the work done. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5d1e0a284fca,022EE73C4244,Having students choose their project will save both the teachers and students from the painful force feeding of information. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3726d4fd11d5,022EE73C4244,"Now, this assignment can not be a free for all, that would not be completely fair. There may be some students who go above and beyond while some may do the bare minimum and call it done. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a5b52f9c901e,022EE73C4244,To avoid this scenario teachers could implement some sort of rubric or guidelines for what the student chosen project would have to include and how they will go about grading it. This way the playing field is level and everyone has the opportunity to succeed. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e3354441c900,022EE73C4244,A common issue faced with summer work is the student procrastination. Obviously no one wants to do schoolwork on their vacation so it is common practice to put it off for as long as possible and then rush the night before. Even if there was three months to do it! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a25ac5272d77,022EE73C4244,"With a student chosen project, students may feel more inclined to do their work because working on something that interests them won't feel like such a chore. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+66e5faf2eabb,022EE73C4244,"The end of summer is not fun for anyone involved, students and teachers alike. Why would we want to dampen the vacation with unexciting work looming over students heads the whole time. Students should feel excited to go back to school and be they should have something to look foward to sharing with their classes. It is common knowledge that doing work that is uninteresting to you lowers your performance and makes the work that much more of a chore. With student selected summer assignments we can prevent that and create a new wave of excitement about returning to school.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5f20ed34ee51,023CEE52C08C,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", it tals about how scientest are working on new technology to overcome the chalanges of Venus and its complications. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7ff80a11c483,023CEE52C08C,"In the begining of the artical it talks abou how Venus isthe second closest planet from the sun and how it is one of the two most similar planets to Earth. Since it has similarities to Earths' size and density scientest have sentunmanded spacecrafts to Venus to investigate.
+
+Unfortunatlly no space craft has survived acording to the last two sentances of paragraph two. In the beginning of paragraph three it states how a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide engulfs Venus. The clouds on this planet are also highly currosive with sulfuric acid in them. The planets surface averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric presure is 90 times greater than on Earth. This concludes that Venus has the hotest surface tempreature of any planet in our solar system. Venus also has obsticals like erupting valcanos, earthquakes, and frequent lightning stikes on the planets surface. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6460c3c57613,023CEE52C08C,With all these complications though scientest still are curious about this dangerous planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0859f09e1301,023CEE52C08C,"In the second sentance of the fourth paragraph it explains that astronomers are curious because it may have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. The planet resembles a surface with rocky sediment and includes things such as valleys, mountains, and craters.
+
+In the fifth paragraph it states that NASA is coming up with possible solutions to avoid most of these issues. One of them is inventing is a small vehical that resembles a blimp floating 30 miles above Venus's landscape. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7a64b833e900,023CEE52C08C,Now this doesn't get the scientest what they want exactly what they want ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bc308615acee,023CEE52C08C,"because due to the planets atmospher light doesn't peneatrate very well making it difficult to observe ground conditions. It also limits the amount that you would see in pictures and vidoes of the planet. Many researchers are working on new inventions so macheines will last longer on the harsh planet.
+
+For example in the seventh paragraph NASA states that it has been working on electronics made of silicon carbon and they have even tested it a chamber concluding that it lasted in the harsh conditions for three weeks. They are also recyclaling old ideas from the 1800's, they are trying to use a computor that does calculations,but theinvention uses gears and levers, meaning that it doesn't require any electricity to work. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+927aa74c8d21,023CEE52C08C,Scientest are working hard to accheve this goal to explore this harsh mystery planet. They accept the challanges that come with it and they strive to succeed not only to gain insight but to quench their curiosity that all humans have about this planet and the possibilities that it could lead to.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ba3f708db030,02A3E737A10F,Students shouldn't have to participate in one extracurricular activity or any ,Position,Adequate,,,
+efeb7a805421,02A3E737A10F,Students have other things to do at home ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+03205305e7bd,02A3E737A10F,"Many students have a lot of things to do at home and they're already busy with other things. Students have a lot of homework to do from different teachers. For an example students are given a lot of homework and have chores to do at home like cleaning clothes, taking care of their pets, cleaning the house or taking care of their siblings. Some students are already tired from school and might not want to participate in any other activity because they have to wake up early for school and have to do school work really early even though science say that the human brain starts working correctly when it's ten in the morning so that means the human brain of a middle school might not work so well at six or seven in the gosh darn morning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0c8f73f08a4,02A3E737A10F,"I disagree with the principal that every student must participate in an activity because not everyone is sporty, want to stay inside and do the yearbook or serve on the student council. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d1e519f6453,02A3E737A10F,Some kids just want to go home and relax a bit after doing work at school or some just want to play games to realest their stress of school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5986a3e97577,02A3E737A10F,I think that students don't need to participate an any sort of activity that has to do with school because people want their minds off of school and not have to worry so much about it. Kids just wanna have fun out of school and don't want to do anything school related. Well most kids don't want anything to do with school once they get home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9d46712d873,02A3E737A10F,I think that the principal should not decided that every single gosh darn student should do an extracurricular activity. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e36134b9e9ac,02DACD6071FD,"Have you every herd about the story "" A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves""? If you haven't you get to become a Seagoing Cowboy. You also don't just watch farm animals you can stop at places like Greece,Itay,& China on your trip. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9312c509fc2f,02DACD6071FD,You have to try this out ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b5812a378920,02DACD6071FD,"When you go and become a Seagoing Cowboy you get to live on a boat with farm animals. Also while on your way to your distanation you get to stop at cool places. You can stop Greece,Italy,& China. Also even a castle. You get to see different cultures. When your fun and amazing trip comes to an end and you have to go home. Where their were animals is a big and open, because they are gone now. So you play sports like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, and boxing. Also it wastes time on the way back. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fdae40d3aab,02DACD6071FD,I belevie if you do go you would have one of the best time of your life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a07bfe21f26,02DACD6071FD,Also keep in mind this is to help paces after World War II. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fd6e0773bcf,02DACD6071FD,And you get to see how this world changed from a war. And how people are doing in their new home that was maybe was distroed. And when you do help you see how the people are happy and so thankful for you help with supplies. So they can now live again with some comfort.           ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8c6277128522,02DD203E0599,This essay is about if drivers should or not be able to use cell phones in any capacity while operating a vehicle. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bc0f305560fc,02DD203E0599,I strongly feel like drivers shouldn't be able to use their cell phones while operating a vehicle because it can be dangerous for them and everyone else on the road. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+891ea1f779cd,02DD203E0599,Using your cellphone can actually be deadly ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fccafa75c59,02DD203E0599,"because cell phones can cause inattention blindness while driving, you are putting yourself and others around you in danger, and placing a ban on cell phone use while driving is proven to be effective. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+54a1880a8c04,02DD203E0599,Using your cell phone while driving is very common nowadays. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09c1436528db,02DD203E0599,"When people use their cell phones while driving it sometimes has a negative effect. Cell phone usage while driving is a common occurrence in today's society. Unfortunately, it often has a negative impact on drivers using phones and those surrounding them. Because of the growing popularity of cellular devices in modern society, the urge for the public to use their phones frequently is severe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86b011929354,02DD203E0599,"When you are using your cell phone while driving, you're doing all three types which are manual, visual, and cognitive. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+492b86b8daf0,02DD203E0599,"Manual distraction is when you are taking your hands off the wheel for even just a split second. Many deadly accidents are caused by someone bending down to simply pick up their phone that fell on the floor of the car. Many of us don't realize how distracted we are when using our cell phones until we look up from our screens. That's when we notice that we are swerving to one side too much, speeding or slowing down, or that we are very close to the car in front of ours.                                                    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9bac6a121820,0300455258CB,"There is a lot of young teenagers and also adults getting into car accidents. Its because of our cellular devices, texting while driving. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3bfa0bd98cc,0300455258CB,Teens and adults spend most of their time on their cellular devices. They are either on social media or texting. Nobody gets on the phone anymore its all about texting now ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b00c67691273,0300455258CB,It is very dangerous to text while driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccb725ab9e17,0300455258CB,"because you are putting more attention on texting then the road, and they take their eyes off the road while they are driving, which increases the chance that the driver can lose control of the car, and could get into a car accident or worse die. Texting and driving are worse than drinking and driving ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57632ebf19b7,0300455258CB,"Also, it's illegal to text and drive but people still do it cause they don't think about the consequences or what could happen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+89084575ca31,0300455258CB,"Texting and driving is one thing you should not be doing cause a lot of things could happen and texting is not worth risking your life. When you can wait to text the person back or just get on the phone using Bluetooth to the car and talk, its better than risking your life or someone else. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8212dd34061,030F2D5F039D,"Yes, the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e5ae92d2ff47,030F2D5F039D,so students can study and understand how the artist felt when he or she painted on the canvis. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3389d2d2b95a,030F2D5F039D,"They could be happy, sad, surprise, angery, disgusted,and afraid. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2b19fe0dd8c,030F2D5F039D,"The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a good thing, because not only students can the device but middle age people can use the device too. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0df93775ef2,030F2D5F039D,"paragraph 1 said ""She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry."";and how we know that? you may ask. The FACS ""Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS"" witch was stated in paragrah 3; they said all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles and when moving of one or more muscles is called an action unit. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+880138981a1e,030F2D5F039D,"Paragraph 4 said ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal"" and that means every you move your expressions change. They also gave an example they said like not smiling as broadly. They can move and mix emotions in da vinci's masterpiece witch the Mona Lisa useing the FACS. Dr. Huang's new computer software cantanes similar anatomical information as electronic code. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb5b82158731,030F2D5F039D,"So lets say you was trying to see all of your mom's emotions in one picture, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e20f767ca9de,030F2D5F039D,"by useing FACS you can move rotate and mix emotions to figer out your mom emotions, and to have students and teacher do that thats cool ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87e885430b55,030F2D5F039D,"So yes, its valuable. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a49c23db6764,037059DAD8EF,"""Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions."" -Nick D'Alto. The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is very amusing system that can read how a human is feeling. The thought of a computer software being able to decipher what I'm feeling is shocking. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3c3b0c54835c,037059DAD8EF,I believe the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of a student in a classroom is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b74a11853b35,037059DAD8EF,"There are many reasons why I agree with the use of the FACS. For instint, technlogy would be able to identify how you feel about what you're learning, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d6c668d1896,037059DAD8EF,it'll make you a more emotional person ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db8889f0ff9f,037059DAD8EF,it will help you stay on task. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7742d3a09234,037059DAD8EF,I think the FACS has a good chance of changing the future in a possitive way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1aaf01867a83,037059DAD8EF,The FACS was desinged to to recognize six everyday emotions. This would be helpful when a student is confused or does not understand what the teacher is trying to teach. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c8d3582a012,037059DAD8EF,The system could then modify the classwork that the student is working on. With more practice the computer could then change the difficultiness of the assignment according to how the student feels. For an example lets say a gentelman is stuck on a math problem. The frustration that the gentelman is showing will be seen by the computer. The computer will then help the gentelman by modifying it or infroming the teacher where he is struggling. This will better his education and help out more when students are scared to ask for help. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+223f88c57968,037059DAD8EF,The positive effect that the FACS has on the students is another reason why it will be vaulable in classrooms. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6e3d5f4bc10,037059DAD8EF,"In the passage it says,"" According to Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expreess emotions, but also may even help produce them. (""Putting on a happy face"" actually works!)"". This proves that it has been proven by experts that this system could help spread positive vibes. ""Whoever thought that making faces could receal so much about the science of emotions!"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b2f2c65c8168,037059DAD8EF,"Finally, the FACS could help identify when students are bored and are not paying attention. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0faef02f15f,037059DAD8EF,This will help a student pay attention and not stay behind. The solution to this would be to modify the infromation to be interesting or less difficult for a student. I assume that this would decrease the amount of missing assignments and improve grades. This will be better fro the students to gain knowledge. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11fba8973075,037059DAD8EF,"In conclusion the Facial Action Coding System should be used in classrooms for students. They will help improve their interest in topics at school, help the students understand better, it will help students be more possitive, and finally is will have a big impact on all of us. The Facial Action Coding System would be a new way of gaining more knowledge. It will help students and teachers understand eachother better. Overall this would be a positive impact amoung us all. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a2db434c4ab5,0411A43FF828,"How much value would come out of going to Venus? Scientists have tried many times to study Venus. Unfortunatley, they've always come out as failures. People could argue that the effort of studying Venus is useless and ineffective. However, scientists have little to no knowledge of how the planets in our solar system were made. Scientists could have more knowledge of Venus if they found a way to study the planet. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0e5d095f7af2,0411A43FF828,The author of the article is right about the exploration of Venus being a worthy pursuit. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4508ca456dfa,0411A43FF828,The author of the article does mention how difficult it is to study Venus by bringing up the planet's harsh atmosphere in Paragraph 3 ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bc108d224e7f,0411A43FF828,Which further proves his point how valuable it is to study Venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0582e9b6bba1,0411A43FF828,He also points out that Venus may have been a lot like Earth a long time ago in Paragraph 4. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+920e6b44d345,0411A43FF828,"This doesn't just further our understanding of Venus, but it may also give us more information about Earth as well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13851dce0740,0411A43FF828,"In Paragraph 5, the author mentions NASA's plans on how to study Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a223be3f9cf,0411A43FF828,He does mention that those plans may have challenges fo their own in Paragraph 6. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ac0ded4b9bcc,0411A43FF828,"The author pushes to try those plans out in a realistic manner. The author being realistic with the reader, makes the reader want agree with him more. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7c17dbb34874,0411A43FF828,"The author backs up his suggestion with great evidence, but does it in a realistic way. He realizes how dangerous it is to study, but pushes for it by bringing up how little we know about Venus. The author's suggestion is correct and scientists need to find a way to study Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+97caf0b48e4b,04147BBED91A,New software has been developed that improves accuracy in percieving the emotions of others ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5bfc73ad40f2,04147BBED91A,"The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom could be valuable, or it could be a waste of time, depending on how you look at it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ee7e01c3ffc3,04147BBED91A,"Technology has been upgraded throughout recent decades, and most recently, technology has taken a different approach. The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe. Dr. Huang and his colleagues are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate, but is this really a better way to communicate? It comes down to the facts. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Everyone has different ways of expressing emotions, and not everyone feels the same emotions. Thinking that a computer could possibly detect your emotions is a bit silly, to some, and valuable to others. So what makes it silly to some? You can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look on their face, you can talk with them in person. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+401421cde43d,04147BBED91A,"Having physical contact is very important when it comes to emotions, using a computer to detect, sounds a bit far-fetched. Schools have teachers, and school counselors, so that students can talk express how they feel. Some people don't see why this feature could possibly be useful in a classroom. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f225251a6e00,04147BBED91A,"There are many issues going on in the world, much worse than trying to figure our expressions. So, why aren't we using this tchnology, and these smart people to work on something more important? Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad, what would you need it for ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44b6cc50a239,04147BBED91A,"Human communication is very important, using a computer to detect how you feel is simply a waste of time, in some opinions. Making faces can reveal so much about the science of emotion. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+058f4ce3597e,04147BBED91A,"On the other hand, what could the Facial Action Coding System be useful for in classrooms? Students may be able to use this feature in physiciatry studies ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+311d9dc7492f,04147BBED91A,"Students may also use this feature in art classes to really capture what the artist was depicting in the work. For instance, this new software was able to create percentages of Mona Lisa's emotions. The latest innovation in computer software may be very useful for art classes, knowing how a person may be feeling in a painting may help students to depict the artists work, a bit better. As humans, we can tell how someone may be feeling by the look on their face, or the look in their eyes. Most of us would have trouble trying to describe what facial expressions convey being happy, besides a smile. The computer can make exact percentages on each emotion you may be feeling. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2953f330d3ea,04147BBED91A,"However, a computer cannot feel, cannot have sympathy, and cannot understand many things about humans. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0f1fbaff772e,04147BBED91A,"Reaching the final conclusion is up to you. Is a computer being able to identify your emotions useful in classrooms, or not? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ba6a9d0294ee,04217B837E28,"Venus is a very dangrus planet its ben proven, not one human has lasted more than a few hours floating above the fray,its been more than three decades since a space ship has tuched venus but ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5e605734b4a7,04217B837E28,scientist are till working on the planert wonderingthe same question as you why are we still working on this dangerus planet ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+80799deeb1b1,04217B837E28,"well scientist come to notice that venus has some familiar featurs alike earth it has vallys, mountains,and craters, scientist have come to think that long time ago, venus was probably coverd with oceans and could have suppoted various forms of life, just like earth today., thats why scientists are not giving up on figuring out venus witch is why they are still trying to go back to venus safe and scientificly productive following the safe orders that NASA gave the scientist, NASA gave sicentist permission to go to venus with some conditions,they will only be allowed to be floating above the fry, scientist will have to invent a stronger space ship, and they will have to study not just the planet but the people more so it can be safer and they dont have any risks. not to mention venusis the closest to earth in terms of desity and size, and occasionatly the closest to didtance too its the second planet from our sun known as erths twin. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bcb395f36d13,044FD1AE9230,"There are many limiting car usage, through out the world, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+101d87bb60ea,044FD1AE9230,many are in the suburb of germany. some are also in Bogota. And many more countrys like the United states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2780ab68256,044FD1AE9230,", it has some car limiting usage. the country that it resigns in  the suburbs of germany. For an example "" automobiles are linchpin of the suburbs where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai  tend to make thier homes."" ""Experments said that there is a drastically reduce greenhouse gas emision from the tailpipes. It also states that the passager cat are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas  emissions in Europe. And up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the united states."" ( Rosenthal, paragraph 5) So thats a limiting car usage ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+533f10daa01f,044FD1AE9230,Because  the greenhouse percentage is going up in many countries  mainly Europe and the United States. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+242b34b2d211,044FD1AE9230,"Thats just not it, The united states has been the worlds prime car cultures.  ""Its also the birthplace of the model T; the home of Detroit; the place where Wilsom Pickett immortalized ""Mustanf Sally"""" "" Demographic shifts in the driving population  suggest that the tend may accelerate. There has been a large drop in percentage of 16-to 39 years olds getting a license, while older people are likely to retain thier licenses as they age"" Mr. Sivaks research has found. (paragraph 39) In New York , there is  a ""proliferation of car-sharing programs acroos the nation"" (paragraph 37)  there are many car limiting advantages like is stated above  car-sharing that was devolped in New  York and now travling all over the United States. There are many elder people reatinging their license. And less younger people getting thier licenses. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8dafd6deb7b7,044FD1AE9230,"there are many advantages, going through the United States in to Europe. Those are some of the advantages of limiting car usage. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4b1e4c493bfd,0491C7BFA9B4,"Attention !!! to all the residents of this community are Bendz and Suburban going were all the extoic cars and muscle cars at all i see bendz and suburban, Its few foreigen cars out there in the street. when I riding on the highway I like to see Mustangs and And Lamborginis ride aside if me because its excited other people it make them want to buy Mustangs and Lamborginis.
+
+Yes Bendz are nice but i want to see some foreiegn cars Like Bugati and RoyalRoce 50% you will see foreiegn ride around in the city I like to take a trip to see al type of cars with nice paint job and nice looking skirt. You will not see that much cars riding around because people sell them to live in beautyful homes. In 2007 all the streets was full with muscle cars because the rapper Rick Ross was the first person drive a drop top mustang so many people was so excited thats i seen the whole streets with differnt type of mustangs and drop tops.
+
+In the early 90's thats when automobile was invented,  they really was made for middle-class families and Miami to Tallahassee Because it was alot of people thst need gas and lights when the hurricane came through.12 percents of huge houses gas emission in Chicago... and up 72 percent cars-invented area in the united states while they building cars some people has catch buses.
+
+It has been efforts in the past two years to make denser and better for walking in 2010 that's when stationwagins was invented so people really did have to walk anymore or catch buses but some catch buses because it save gas and money. In the united states the protection agency is promoting car reduced communities and legislators are starting to act.
+
+every since world war I alot of cars was getting destroy lets stop destory cars because thats our transportation said Martin Luther King jr, a fast growing of hundreds in the united states was getting larger and the car population more foreiegn cars and mucle cars was hitting the streets.                    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fcde6d8cebc6,04B4209D8A34,"You may like soccer, art, or even debate. The possibilities are endless to any activity that you could join at your school. Extracurricular activities are important to every school. Though every school has different activities, each and every one of them play a key role. Students may wonder why their principal would make them have to stay after a long day of learning. Students may think that extracurricular activities aren't interesting, but they may not realize how many options their school has to offer. Our principal should start putting up sheets that inform you on what activities we have and a brief explanation about them. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2bb7cac3fac3,04B4209D8A34,I agree that it should be mandatory for all students to participate in at least one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+31f36b059200,04B4209D8A34,they will be involved in their school ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+52b380e7af54,04B4209D8A34,they will make friends ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c0dd3728cc9f,04B4209D8A34,they could enjoy it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+417ac9e47c2d,04B4209D8A34,Students should always feel involved in their school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d17b99fb8370,04B4209D8A34,"Every student matters and can make a difference. A good way to be involved at school is to join an extracurricular activity. For example, if someone joined the SCA then they would be involved by organizing school dances and events. Giving ideas to the student council is another way to be a part of your school. Say you thought that the dress code needed to be adjusted, you could join a club and talk about it. These clubs can be used to spread awareness for bullying. Someone could of been bullied and they want to feel part of something so they join a club for bullying awareness. Students should encourage others to be part of something at their school. There are numerous ways to be involved at your school, all you need to do is put yourself out there. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7a114fdc93ff,04B4209D8A34,"Joining an extracurricular activity is a great way to make new friends, because you get to meet people that you would of never talked to if you didn't join that club. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f1155e3369a,04B4209D8A34,"If you are generally a shy person then a club or sports team will help you meet new people. For instance, if you get on a sports team you and your team will become one big family. You all will work together during games which will create a bond. Another example is if you join an art club you will have something to talk about because you both will like art. Sometimes it can be hard to open up to people and make friends but trust me doing an activity will help that tremendously. When I first joined JV soccer I was really intimidated by all the big kids, but then I talked to them and they seemed really nice and talked to me. This goes to show that extracurricular activities can help you make friends that you would of never made if you didn't join that club. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ab3fe61b8eeb,04B4209D8A34,Another important reason to join a club is that you could actually really enjoy it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b263824b0b2,04B4209D8A34,"Even if you have no experience with an of the choices, but it sounds interesting to you then you should go for it. Trying out new things is good and you never know how good you'll be at it. If you try photography for the first time you could like it so much that you do it again next year. Also, you could join the tennis team and realize that you're really good at it and end up becoming a famous tennis player. However, not everyone is going to like the choices that they have. Well, our school could have an option that students get to create a club that they would like. This solves the problem because other students could like the same thing as their peers so they would want to join that club. Someone could want to create a club for ROTC and another student may want to be in the military so they join that club. Instead of joining a random club because you have to, try to actually find one that you enjoy. There are many choices for students because the principal want everyone to be able to do an activity that they like. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f151d3e0cd5b,04B4209D8A34,Extracurricular activities provide lots of opportunities for students. You will make lots of memories and friends from joining these clubs. Many students have joined activities and enjoyed being involved so they kept doing that same club every year ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c540787b848,04B4209D8A34,"However, some students may find it rude to be forced to do an activity. We have homework and activities outside of school ,so why do we have to stay at school for an extra hour? In order to make everyone agree with the idea of having to participate in a club we have to fix the problems. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a79328cd029b,04B4209D8A34,"Yes, students have homework to do, so we can have each club have a specific day of the week to prevent students from staying after everyday ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+86cc4a288245,04B4209D8A34,Another issue is what if parents can't pick up their child? ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+856613ef55df,04B4209D8A34,Then in that case the school will provide transportation from the school to the students bus stop ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9ef03ff895c2,04B4209D8A34,"There is no reason why students shouldn't join clubs. Activities at your school can help you be involved, make friends, and you could enjoy the club. This is why I agree that students should have to at least participate in one extracurricular activity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f689e7feb8cb,04CD9AA9ECC5,My claim to do studying on Venus is saying no I think spending so much time and money on something that has been tempted to do multiple times and failed is wasteful. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+025085d165df,04CD9AA9ECC5,Because we have tried on numerous accaions and have got just a few hours with a little bit of information it is not worth it. Researchers know that they only get a super small time to only see a little bit of a huge planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5500877dbada,04CD9AA9ECC5,"Knowing that Venus is a whole planet the size of earth and only getting to see just a tiny bit of it is like starting at one side of the United States and then driving only a few hours to see how far you get, If you are trying to go all the way around the world to get back to the same spot but only have a few hours to do so, you don't cover much of anything to have any real say of how the world looks in different areas if you haven't seen it all yet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b670edfc1907,04CD9AA9ECC5,In conclusion to the challenge of Venus I say it is a time waster and we will not be able to see the whole planet of Venus with only a few hours once every few decades. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+121ac22193d7,04FF4D9B5B3D,"Do you think it would be valuble to use the Facial Action Coding System is a technolgy that read your emotions and read it off with a percentige here is an example as it says in th first pargraph she is 83 percent happy.9 percent disguested,6 percent fearfull,and 2 percent angry. The process of the FACS is th computer constructs a 3-D model of the face all 44 major muscles in the model must move like hummans muscle's. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e9c983e34540,04FF4D9B5B3D,"Dr. Huang relies on his work for pschologist such as Dr. Paul Eckman creator of FACS Eckman has classiflied 6 basic emotions such as happpnies,surpise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness. Anf then associted with characteristic's movemnet's for ecample your frontails pars latrerails muscle's raises your eyebrows when you're surpirsed your'r orbiuclas oris tight your lips up show anger.
+
+""The Facial expression for each are univesal""' obsevers Dr. Huang ""even ttrough indivduals ofeten show carry's degree of expression like not smiling as brodly well using a video, in a real life face or in a paiting by weighinh the diffent units the software can even identfy mixed emotions as in Da vincis master pice each expression is compared to a neutral face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+391c72a55f87,04FF4D9B5B3D,Yes but no do i think this is valuable because i feel like my emotion's is my personal problems but if pschologist are using it to hep kids and people then yes i belive it is very valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f04468bea831,0548DE784D69,"The challeange of exploring venus
+
+Study venus is a pursuit to dangers, Venus is the challenging planet to humans because of the diffculties. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+17aaff46cbce,0548DE784D69,"This planet is one of the closest planet to earth which is also dngerous to earth if anything comes up at anything and we do not find a way to overcomme the challenges in venus it might destroyed the earth. this passage explain to that it is called the ""earth twin"".
+
+"" 97 percent carbon dioxide blanketts cover the venus evedn more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atomosphere"" venus also have the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system no human can surive carbon dioxide without oxygen it is one of the hottest planetno xspace crft haver ever landed on the ground. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a264ece3b019,0548DE784D69,No livingthings lives on this planet if we caan find a solution to this problem we be one of the greatest achievement that human accomplish on earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58981dac2d41,0548DE784D69,"we can also make this planet our planetary, 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7ff9a6ca179,0548DE784D69,"venus is one of the most challenging exploring planet on the slolar system.
+
+if we can find a way to overcome this challenges we should be able to over come all other planet on the solar system challegings this we dont have to worry about this earth twin to affect our own earth. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8a90122633f8,0557D6B9B3E5,"When you attempt to find love there are dangers. The one you have chosen may have a history of being unfit to hold a relationship, or just has a bad makeup due to their past and they don't feel like changing now. Venus is just like the signifacant other you are looking for. Whilst it is a planet, it has numours dangers like it's chemical makeup, temperature,etc. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e74fcac92412,0557D6B9B3E5,The author couldn't be any better in this story on why even with it's dangers we on earth should venture out and see what Venus is all about. Giving us multiplie reasons why we need to find a way to get someone (or something) over there as soon as possible ,Position,Adequate,,,
+15707b3bc0a3,0557D6B9B3E5,"The first reason that was broguht upon my eyes was in paragraph eight where it states, ""~but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f85f6814324,0557D6B9B3E5,when we are able to achieve the abilitiy to get over to our sister planet we will be able to find and conqure much more challenging issues ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b4e367ac559,0557D6B9B3E5,"Another reason that the author wrote in the text was in paragraph 2 it states, ""Ofter reffered to as Earth's 'Twin,' Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+754a9d45c19a,0557D6B9B3E5,This shows me that when we are able to get over to this planet we will be able to see 'what is over on that side of the river'.Meaning that we will be able to see what the closest looking planet to earth is really about ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eeba50cc6976,0557D6B9B3E5,"The third and final reason the author wrote about in the passage was written in paragraph three as it stated, "" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04291ebcaea0,0557D6B9B3E5,"This is showing me that we already know alot about the chemical makeup of this planet, but there is always something more we can figure out about this topic. Just like with anything theres always a second story or a second layer that tells us more. Here if we ever do decide to take on this task we will be able to see the entire chemical makeup of our sister planet Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a7985f5bb26c,0557D6B9B3E5,In conclusion the author did an amazing job by giving us (the reader) multiple reasons on why we on earth should go and venture out in our solar system and figure out what Venus is truly all about. And maybe we'll be able to create this planet into a new habitat. The only way we shall know is if we are able to venture out and do such. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a97e12032760,0581A6F4E804,The new technology used to undertstand facial expressions would be a valuable thing in a classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+aed9a1eef645,0581A6F4E804,"This can help alot in schools,because the system will be able to understand the students emotions like confused,or bored,the system can modify and change the learning style ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1442704f07dc,0581A6F4E804,"This can increase the students studying skills and also they would learn more efficiently. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+854a1a5b8bf2,0581A6F4E804,"The text states that,a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,'Dr. Huang predicts.""then it would be able to modify the lesson,like an effective human instructor.'This show that the facial recognition can help students to learn more. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94a448a93124,0581A6F4E804,"The system can help teachers alot in schools to let them know what they need to change to teach better. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+96546e8a0ecc,0581A6F4E804,In the future the facial recognizer might be able to replace teachers. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+65fffd634488,0581A6F4E804,"The idea is still to far off because the system , still doesn't understand that most human comunications are none verbal. The system could help solve crimes and other things it would be able to recognize if a person is lying or not by their facial expresions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5809e26d9b9e,0581A6F4E804,"The system would be a good way to teach students at schools or at home if possible. Now the students will not be bored in class,neither will they be confused because the system would be able to recognize it and change it ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7ac9530eb601,0581A6F4E804,The progam still has alot of flaws ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0fb4feedb8e2,0581A6F4E804,"but when is solved hopefully, we can have them in our classrooms in the future this could be the most valuable ""teacher"" so far it would be of a great value for schools.  ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b9e31ca13653,05C9186E77DF,"In Nick D'Alto's article, "" Making Mona Lisa Smile"", the author suggests that Dr. Hung's new facial regonation would be useful for many things including using it in a class room to read stusdents' emotional expressions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a99c06cc83a4,05C9186E77DF,I agree with Dr. Hung that the software would be useful to help decipher mixed emoitions. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b4f4fdad7fdb,05C9186E77DF,"In his article, he uses the Mona Lisa as an example, and I personally think that it was a good example to help show her conveyed expressions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+362609120277,05C9186E77DF,"Dr. Hung invented the Facial Action Coding System, which helps identify the emotions displayed on the human face,and paintings such as Leonardo da Vinci's Mona Lisa. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00e6abd1786e,05C9186E77DF,"If this technology was used in a classroom setting, I think that it could be used to help teachers understand if some of their students are enjoying the lesson. Or it could possibly be used to tell when the students are lying to their teachers. The Facial Action Coding System shows the six basic emotion that are associated with the movements of ones facial muscles. The basic emotions are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This technology can also identify mixed emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78334f89045f,05C9186E77DF,Humans perfom the same amount of emotions everyday. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+df107ad89b2e,05C9186E77DF,"For example, a friend could probably tell how you feel by looking at your face. But some people might have trouble describing what each facial expression means. Dr. Hung had oserved had aritists like leonardo who had studied human anatomy that had helped them to paint human emotions. Similarly, Professor Hungs Facial Action Coding System is able to be electorically stored with some information about human anatomty and emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0bb207fbe3ce,05C9186E77DF,"Lastly, there are fourty-four major muscles in the human face. For example. a muscle called the obricularis oculi pars palabraeus is the muscle that makes the crow's-feet shape around your eyes. Experts can tell a real smile from a fake smile by the way your mouth is moved. Facial muscles can help produce emotions, by the movement of your muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec435962a7cf,05C9186E77DF,"With the help of the Facial Action Coding System, I think that teachers could easily figure out the emotions that their students faces are conveying. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2f1141f3b7e,05C9186E77DF,"This coding system seems to be revelotionary to me because of it can decipher emotions and it could help many people such as students, teachers, and even the government. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30e9374f29fc,05C9186E77DF,"In conclusion, I personally think that with the help of this technology teachers will be able to read into their students emotions better. Also, teachers would be able to tell if students are lying to them. The value of this technolgy would be able to help them read the facial expressions of many people with diasbilites who have trouble conveying emotions. I beleive that is this type of technology were to be used in a classroom that it would be a great help to many teachers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b890c1310b23,05E95229344B,"When I think about schools, I think about a little community because that's basically what it is. Everyone is together for most of the day,every single day. So yes I agree with everyone doing one extracurricular activity that way everyone has tried it and be part of the community. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1edce1cc95f7,05E95229344B,"something to take into consideration is that i dont think the kids will really go. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69c65c10e9b6,05E95229344B,So there's pros and cons in this I know that but deciding if its something I truly believe in then no. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0b3a73793a9f,05E95229344B,Another con about the extracurricular activity is not every parent has time to pick their kid up after school because they rather pick the kids up instead of letting their kid walk home alone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c175dd01776,05E95229344B,Do I believe this is a good idea? Yes ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0e849a2aad1a,05E95229344B,"but that's not the question,the question was do I agree with it? No I don't. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+18200bd92f5b,05E95229344B,"Im one of the kids that don't have time for this activity so knowing how my day goes and trying to add on it,really isnt gonna be good for me ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6469c7e03311,05E95229344B,"For the kids that do have the time and effort to actually do it can do it but it shouldnt have to be pushed on somebody to do it, it just be there like an option just in case you do have extra time and are able to really do it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd12ca9f984b,05E95229344B,"The kids should want to do these things so they can join but if its not possible then it shouldnt be pushed on them,kids should have a choice if they wanna commit do something like that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3610b426dbec,05E95229344B,"The point is most of the kids just don't commit or have time or family events, everyone is different you can't just expect every kid just to go.
+
+So no I dont agree with what the princlai said at all and it should be there for kids to choose it or not for them to force it on the kids. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fc524f7af595,06BE6D6749EA,There once was three citizen friends from boston who wanted who wanted to limit car usage to 70 percent they realized it was a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+61807b429e02,06BE6D6749EA,it'll help people avdanced experiment in low-car suburban life but its basic precepts are being adopted around the world ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea70f90919bf,06BE6D6749EA,attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation with less parking space in this new approach stores are far away to walk to on a main street rather than in small malls around some distant highway ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4da36400d2f3,06BE6D6749EA,its a good idea because if they give up their cars therre will less traffic no accidents or any parking space ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8280bd4af48e,06BE6D6749EA,it will be less problems with people they think if they give up there cars there will be a safer street for everyone ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44c71e47eef7,06BE6D6749EA,some people didnt like idea because if they give up there cars they wont be able to get to their jobs on time and at the same some people live to far from jobs and homes that they want keep people driving their cars            ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5621a557205a,071BF63AF332,"""We have to join a club?"" Generic_Name said shocked, ""Like, we have to?"". Generic_Name looked confused and slightly angry. ""Yes Generic_Name, you do have to join a club, it's a requirement for the new year."" said Principal Generic_Name. Generic_Name looked down than looked back up at his principal, ""Great."" Generic_Name said sarcastically. Generic_Name spent that school day looking around and asking about the different clubs the school offers. While Generic_Name was looking, one club caught his eye. The gaming club. When Generic_Name was out of school he always played video games, it was his favorite pass time! Since the gaming club was the only club that sounded remotely appealing to Generic_Name, he signed up. His first day in the club, he was skeptical, but he quickly realized the club was far better than he expected. 2 weeks passed since Generic_Name joined and he already made plenty of new friends and learned about many new games that he grew to love. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+37992f5647e5,071BF63AF332,Schools should make it a requirement for all students participate in a extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c0392ffc652d,071BF63AF332,"it helps students meet new people and make new friends, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e70acbb5ce88,071BF63AF332,it can introduce students to something they've overlooked or have never heard of before ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+390f043ecb8b,071BF63AF332,it can increase social activity among students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c16fba1027c3,071BF63AF332,having students join and participate in an extracurricular activity can help them meet new people and make new friends. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3f78eb74796e,071BF63AF332,"Joining an extracurricular activity such as a club or a sports team can be very beneficial to students. Having students join clubs can help shy students talk to new people and make more friends. Even someone who is frequently talkative and already has a lot of friends can meet and talk to new people who share the same interests as them in the club. Having friends who share your interests is something that every student wants, and joining an extracurricular activity can help students achieve that. It was only Generic_Name's first day in the club when he met two people who would later become his best friends. ""Hello,"" said a voice Generic_Name has never heard, ""My name is Generic_Name."". Generic_Name looked at Generic_Name and shook his hand, ""Hey Generic_Name, i'm Generic_Name. Nice too meet you"". The person standing behind Generic_Name introduced himself next. ""Sup Generic_Name. My name's Generic_Name, I'm Generic_Name's Friend."" he said. ""Nice too meet you as well Generic_Name."" Generic_Name replied. Generic_Name, Generic_Name and Generic_Name quickly became good friends because of their similar interests. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+081439ace80c,071BF63AF332,"requiring students to join an extracurricular activity can introduce students to something they've overlooked in the past, or something completely new. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0cbd4c5b7a4c,071BF63AF332,"Students have their interests, they either like something, or they don't. Something might not come off as interesting to them at first glance. They might only start to realize something is interesting to them when they take another look. If schools do an event that shows off each different club, students will get that ""second glance"" that they need. For example, my older brother wanted to join a club in high school. He looked through the website and found that nothing sounded interesting to him. He decided to look again, this time actually reading the descriptions of each club. He eventually found the art club. He read the description, thought it sounded interesting and signed up. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+506f1d68d554,071BF63AF332,"ubs and sports are very social activities. If they're in a club, students are basically required to socialize with others. This for the most part is a very positive benefit, allowing students to talk to others who share similar interests with them. Students may even spend time outside the clubs with the people they've met. For example, my cousin Generic_Name's mom, forced Generic_Name to join a club. She said Generic_Name wasn't socializing enough and spent to much time time on his computer. Generic_Name asked around to find a club that was preferably easy. He eventually found the computer club which aligned with his interests, and his want to spite my aunt by ""playing on computers"" in his club. Despite that my aunt got her wish and Generic_Name became more social outside of school with his new club.
+
+Generic_Name had spent his entire 10th grade year in the gaming club. Now that summer was approaching for the first time in his life he felt sad about leaving during the summer. Generic_Name never thought by joining a club his perception about school would change this drastically. The next day Generic_Name and his club talked about meeting up over the summer, everyone was ecstatic about the idea. Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and Generic_Name all have met up before outside of the club before, but the entire club has never got together like this. School ended just as fast as it started and the day quickly approached when the club would get back together again. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+25e66e444fd3,071BF63AF332,"schools should make it so all students have to participate in an extracurricular activity such as a club or a sport because it helps students make new friends and build relationships, it can introduce students to something they've overlooked in the past, and it can increase social activity among students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+06d48a75b4e7,072BF1F05F66,"According to the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" there is a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) that enables computers to identify human emotions. This technology is relatively brand new. It creates a 3-D computer model of all fourty-four major muscles in the face that move like human muscles as well. Then, psychologists have classified six basic emotions that are associated with different movements in the facial mucles. This new technology could result in many benefits in our community as well as all around the world ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4c2ee7d56e14,072BF1F05F66,The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Effective,,,
+e32e969cc4cd,072BF1F05F66,it would allow teachers to know when students become confused ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0b50478a23f6,072BF1F05F66,are being dishonest ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1dc51077c58a,072BF1F05F66,or are depressed and possibly having problems at home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c7f8ef78a014,072BF1F05F66,"In the classroom, it is common for students to tend to get confused while being taught a lesson. It is also common for students to get bored and become uninterested in the lesson at hand. With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers can make sure that their students are acquiring the best education possible and absorbing all of the material. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+14ecb8656a88,072BF1F05F66,"Teachers can adapt their teaching style according to how students respond to the lesson being taught. This way, both the students and teachers can be on the same page, making education easier for students and teachers. The article states,""'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,'"" (D'Alto). In this quote, Dr. Huang is telling the reader how this new technology could possibly develop into something much bigger where it can modify the lesson for students who become bored or confused, making it an easier and better experience for the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+785412ef219c,072BF1F05F66,"School behavior is a big part of a students education. If a student is constantly acting out and misbehaving it could affect his or her education pretty badly. Although, that is why Facial Action Coding Systems could also be very useful in a classroom environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d8b8c79aa4a0,072BF1F05F66,"The technology could be able to detect if a student is being dishonest, which could prove very handy when dealing with situations with delinquents and trouble-makers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ad0978b95e70,072BF1F05F66,"In the excerpt, the author writes, ""To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ""smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful,"" (D'Alto). In this quote, the author tells the reader about some facial muscle clues that allow experts to tell if a famous figure is being dishonest. These are some of the same facial clues the FACS looks for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fecf4ba1b67,072BF1F05F66,"Finally, The FACS could help find if students are depressed or having problems at home. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+02f438f0f765,072BF1F05F66,"The machine can detect six different emotions, including sadness. This could prove useful when dealing with distressed students. ""Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles"" (D'Alto). This quotes tells the reader about the emotions the machine can read. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+650c08a58c4c,077A62D46D30,"Just before the bell rings to dismiss students for year, teachers are struggling to keep the attention of students when explaining their summer assignments for the break. The students know that the summer assignments are important, but their attention is on the bell that declares summer vacation. Summer assignments are designed to ensure that students continue their intellectual journey over breaks. Both teacher-designed projects and student-designed projects accomplish this goal, however, one of the biggest challenges is deciding whether teacher-designed projects or student-designed project would do a better job at accomplishing this goal ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9f078f11ffa4,077A62D46D30,The best way to ensure that students continue learning over break is to assign teacher-designed projects. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+65ca1a573d76,077A62D46D30," Summer projects should be teacher-designed because teachers have a better understanding of the material, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1ce0fdfad21e,077A62D46D30,the project will be less stressful for students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+64d1e153fde7,077A62D46D30,"teacher-designed projects will prevent misjudgment of students by teachers. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+24f03257e7db,077A62D46D30,Teachers should design summer projects because they have a better understanding of the material they are trying to teach. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e3c24f15136a,077A62D46D30,"They also tend to have a clear understanding of what they expect from students for the projects they assign. By assigning teacher-designed summer projects, the teacher can guide the students to learn what the teachers want them to discover. They also provide a more specific rubric so the students know exactly what is expected of them. For example, AP Biology has a lot of material that needs to be covered in just one year. To solve this issue, they assign a teacher-designed summer assignment that consists of an introduction to each unit learned throughout the year. This way, students are prepared when going in depth with all of the concepts in class because they already have a grasp of the topic learned during break. By assigning teacher designed projects, teachers can guide the students to ensure that what they are learning and exploring can help them perform better in class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+90c383808181,077A62D46D30,"Another reason teachers should design the summer project, is that the project will be less stressful to students overall. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+246544c60f06,077A62D46D30,"Although teachers are expected to be unbiased, they will always have personal beliefs that may clash with a student's beliefs. During student-designed projects over the summer, students do not know the personal beliefs and preferences of their teacher because many students have not spent much time with their future teacher. Student-designed projects are often stressful in this situation because students do not always know the teacher's expectations. Students do not want to receive a lower grade on their project because of the biases of the teacher. Students also feel anxious because they never know if their project is unique enough to get a good grade and if the teacher will find it as interesting as the student. For example, many science classes require students to conduct experiments in a field they find interesting. Not only is this assignment very vague, but it is also unfair. There are many different ways a student could take this project and some projects require more time and effort than others. For example, testing to see the effects of personal care products that get into waterways on marine life requires a lot more time, effort, and materials compared to testing which brand of paint needs the least amount to coats to adequately cover the walls. Both of the projects meet the criteria, but one project may be considered better than the other by a teacher. This gives many students anxiety because they never know if their project is good enough. Student-designed projects are too stressful and often end up diminishing the quality of the student's summer break by giving them anxiety. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7e2bdeb97c63,077A62D46D30,Some teachers may argue that student-designed summer projects are an outlet for students to show their creativity. They believe that students can showcase their intellectual level by completing student-designed projects and the teachers can get a better understanding of their students' beliefs and preferences through student-designed projects ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+caba48ef6688,077A62D46D30,"However, student-designed projects are not always the best reflection of the students and their work ethic. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+78587f04e153,077A62D46D30,"Many students go on vacation during the summer for extended periods of time and may not always be able to do what they actually wanted to do. Many students visit family in places that do not have the internet or adequate resources to complete the project that they wanted to complete. For example, if a student wanted to test the effects of personal care products that get into waterways on marine life, it would be impossible for them to do so if their relatives lived in an underdeveloped and remote village in India because they would not have access to the materials they need. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08355c914e5f,077A62D46D30,"However, with teacher-designed projects, students can work with their future teacher to plan ahead to complete the assignment or complete a different assignment entirely depending on their situation. Students would not be forced to settle for something that is not a true reflection of their work ethic because of their circumstances. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4160ddc6c16e,077A62D46D30,Teacher-designed projects are the best way for schools to ensure that students continue learning material for classes during break without causing anxiety in students or misjudgment of students by teachers. Summer projects are meant to help students but student-designed projects can sometimes harm students instead. Every student should be allowed to spend their summer without stressing about how they will be perceived by their fellow classmates and teachers the next year. Summer projects should encourage students to continue to learning while also spending quality time with their family and friends during their break. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6af5e509bac8,07D3CBDEFCEF,"Growing up in a constantly changing environment, students have had to learn to adapt to the world around them. In school, students are taught to be open and ready to learn, while still facing the ups and downs in the journey of childhood to adulthood. Students make close bonds with their friends and even a few choice teachers. Students choose to whom they share their emotions with and at what time they wish to do so ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c6551a98569e,07D3CBDEFCEF,"Emplimenting a computer system in schools that is capable of reading a students emotions is inappropriate, lazy, and dangerous. ",Position,Effective,,,
+639ee76a0b2a,07D3CBDEFCEF,"This technology is incredible. It's capable of easily figuring out what someone feels right when they're feeling it. Empathy is an intimate ability one experiences with another. Most people have the ability to sense others emotions, ""For instance, you can probably telll how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face."" There is a prominent understanding in the natural world regarding emotions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c78c479fb102,07D3CBDEFCEF,Sometimes not every one wants to be figured out and displayed to their peers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+879bf316f666,07D3CBDEFCEF,"In school, students are faced with one major task: to learn. Teachers are faced with the task of teaching. A teacher's job is to engage students and the students job is to stay engaged with the teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+39d32ef68ce1,07D3CBDEFCEF,"Emplementing facial reading teachnology is innappropriate and dangerous to the privacy of students, and it threatens the basic principles school systems were founded upon. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2664e005195e,07D3CBDEFCEF,"Furthermore, this technology could be used in the wrong situations. The article stated that a smart school computer could tell when students are getting bored or confused and change the lesson, ""' A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. Then is could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'"" This example puts teachers in an awkward position. Letting a smart, facial reading technology teach students would mean the teachers aren't teaching ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+566b15f4a243,07D3CBDEFCEF,"Giving power to technology is complacent, instead of working with people to improve learning habits or teaching methods, adults would be taking the easy way out. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+26a803f09b99,07D3CBDEFCEF,Some might argue that these computers might be a useful tool for counselors in schools ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4327343f6057,07D3CBDEFCEF,"This is a valid argument, but this also compromises the position of school counselors. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a3b232606843,07D3CBDEFCEF,"Their job is to connect and work with students. When introducing a computer system, students may realize they are just another task to be completed in the work place. Every year, students are analyzed to see where they place on the national benchmark for their education, they take standardized tests to see how much they know, they do hearing tests and eye tests, but a computer has yet to analyze them to see how happy they might be. If computers are introduced to read emotions, students may feel like they are just a number or rank of emotions. If students go to their counselors, they want to be talked to and connected with. Bringing in a computer can divide the connection from child to adult. The child may feel alienated and refuse to converse with the adult. This computer may seem like a helpful tool, but it destroys the importance of human connection. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d9894f1d324b,07D3CBDEFCEF,"The age of computers is inescapable, but it doesn't have to be. Instead of computer analyzed emotional connection, people should put their phones down and ask each other how they are. Not every person wants their emotions analyzed, especially in schools. Students bonds with teachers are simply student to teacher; a child must trust an adult before they talk about their feelings. Computer facial technology might be helpful, but not in schools. This technology falls flat in the category of connection. Don't take the easy way out, instead of analyzing emotions with a computer, ask someone how they are. If a student looks upset, sit down and talk with them. Show someone they are valuable and deserve one on one human interaction ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8cd0045c76c1,07ECEB4E4BE1,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author suggest that studing venus is worth while even though their are extreme dangers while doing it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9949042e82e8,07ECEB4E4BE1,"The author supports this idea in the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" by the similarites to earth making the dangers worth while ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63dd59c75d2e,07ECEB4E4BE1,"the testing on diffrent pieces of equitmeant to withstand the extreme climate of venus, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+034f064f31b0,07ECEB4E4BE1,the life they believe was once their making it a plave they want to explore. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8592b977ce3a,07ECEB4E4BE1,The author in the article explains many resons in which he or she thinks the dangers of venus are worth it for science ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53e943046fba,07ECEB4E4BE1,"one of them being the similarities which they can see from far distance the planet has to earth. the author says Venus is often referred to as the earths twin due to the size, mountain like, and believed to have many oceans and waterways making venus very simlar to the earth. with venus being the closest planet as well to the earth having a closer distance to venus from earth. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b5570fda4d5,07ECEB4E4BE1,Though Venus is concidered the twin to earth it has many diffrent features making it dangerous for scientist to explore the planet. One of these extreme dangers is the diffrence in climate as said in the article Venus reaches upwards of 800 degrees Fahrenheit easily melting most metals making it hard to recieve samples from the planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77051e84a016,07ECEB4E4BE1,Though they have tested many new products in chambler ith simlar climate to venus finding new ways to hopefully find more out about Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+23d7f5047608,07ECEB4E4BE1,lastly the author also talks about how Venus most likely had life on the planet similar to that of earths ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d9f1d084a2a4,07ECEB4E4BE1,"scientist are interested in finding out more about this even though many dangers are included in this task. Finding new ways to make sysems in which can be sent to Venus is difficult but found early computers with physical componets might be the key to their succsess in finding out avout Venus past. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83c2f9800394,07ECEB4E4BE1,"In conclution Venus has many similarities to earth, but due to the extreme conditions of Venus it makes it hard for scientist to explore and find out more about the planet, even though it is the closest to the planet earth. These dagers and risk are worthwhile due to the simlarities the earth shares with venus, the new test of equtmeant in which can withstand these climates, and the life in which they believe use to be on Venus all make exporing Venus, even with dangers worth the time. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cc2efa0fe5a8,0821EB1AEDED,"Students often moan and groan about summer projects that their teachers assign them to do over summer break to assure they continue learning over the period they are not in school. The projects most of the time, have a set rule book to follow that was issued by the teacher and it makes the project boring and not enjoyable for the students to do, basically being a burden the students have to over come during their relaxing summer break. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+40ea6ed111a6,0821EB1AEDED,These projects that get assign should be more student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54a14c3b2912,0821EB1AEDED,students can be more freely creative with their own ideas ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ed365b17352,0821EB1AEDED,"it will be more enjoyable to do for them, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+207081c30a25,0821EB1AEDED,"they can continue learning in a more ideal way. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c8e67ec973b,0821EB1AEDED,"Having the project be more student-designed, students would not have to struggle with limitations and can be more creative and use their own ideas for a better outcome of the project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4994c2009caf,0821EB1AEDED,"Teachers often put a strict instructional guide or manual on what to do and what not to do, during the assignment and limits what students can do and blocks any originality. However, having a student-designed project will unleash a wave of ideas and flow of creativity between each student that would not normally be received from a common project. The whole outcome of the entire project will be changed drastically because of the freedom students will have on their own projects and in which, in the end, will satisfy them. During research projects, teachers also frequently limit the student on what they can look up and use. If the project was student-designed, students can freely look up and use what interest them and learn about something that will make them more engaged into the project. They can not be held by idea blocking rules that will make the project disengaging, they can have creativity run free throughout the entire assignment and it will show. Overall, a student-designed project will make a more standout project due to the original ideas students will leave throughout the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d2a16a2146a,0821EB1AEDED,The sound of a project over the summer break already sounds boring and a headache of a time for any person in school to do but students will always be more engaged in a project that will allow their own unique spin on it and uses a piece of mind from them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7ecd3d9dff6,0821EB1AEDED,"The thought of a project is always a dreadful one that all, will have a hard time to get them self to do it but a student-designed project will make it at least, a more enjoyable experience. Students can utilize their brain and knowledge to make it a project to remember and have fun while thinking of an idea to blow teachers and fellow classmates away once they return from break. For example, a science fair allows students to show a unique idea with experiments, this causes fun competition and a enjoyable process on how the project is going to ""wow' the judges. Speaking of competition, if the project would also have an incentive to try to achieve the best project, students would even be more thrilled. The student-designed project will show a big amount of their own ability to the assignment and make them strive for the number one spot. This would heighten the accomplishment of the project and give them a sense of excitement for their own unique project to compete with classmates. In the end, rather than having a normal boring project, students who have a chance to design their own project, will have a lot more fun and excitement in the process of doing the project, in which, will still allow them to learn and not interrupt with their fun and relaxing summer break. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc3bed9f6995,0821EB1AEDED,"Projects also have a based way of learning, a way teachers think it's best for our generation to learn, but they are not our generation, they do not know what is best for us, they just think it; by allowing students to freely design their project, they can learn in their own ideal way. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e3cceed8d845,0821EB1AEDED,"When teachers assign projects that are related to the class, it is reasonable because it help us understand the subject more, but when they assign a regular project, especially one over summer break, it is often a misguided project on what they think students want to learn but does not really aid them. Giving the chance for a student to do something they want to learn about, will get them more engaged and give them their ideal way of learning. They would not have to worry about what teachers think they should learn but rather what they want to learn and will aid them in the future. Students who do a project about what they want to learn will make doing a project like that more enjoyable over a summer break rather than a set learning experience. They will gather more information to aid them in what they want to do, instead of being given something they think they should do, this will make the learning experience way beneficial for them and not waste their time in the long run. They can continue to learn educational information for them and gain more knowledge that matches their learning style and will satisfy what they have learned. Therefore, students would have a better learning experience if they could do projects their own way and had design freedom and not be held down by a set learning path. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4e7e0fcc22ec,0821EB1AEDED,"Projects being put out during summer break will always be a boring and overbearing thing to complete and in some cases even ruin summer break for them overall just to learn information that teachers assign. Having the project be student-designed, however, will change the entire assignment in all, giving more creativity, better pacing, more enjoyment, and a better learning experience for students all around, it will benefit them rather than a teacher-designed project. All projects, even ones put out over summer break, should be student-designed because the outcome will have more uniqueness with student's ideas, the project overall will be more fun, and students will learn in their own learning way.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a0753f4378d0,082E19093947,Would you enjoy your summer if you were required to do some project that didn't intrest you? A project based off of something not to your liking or one that is so boring it would put you to sleep? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cae823862850,082E19093947,Here's why students should be allowed to come up with their own school project to make sure they continue learning over summer. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+07233d4fa0f7,082E19093947,Students would be more likely to want to continue learning by doing their own designed project because they will do it on a subject they want to know more about and intrested in ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b26e804e17d7,082E19093947,the project would be more likely done if choosen by them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c157a8b523dd,082E19093947,it wont feel as required if its student choosen. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57c8bbf272c4,082E19093947,Some people might think it should be teacher based ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3653fc065a39,082E19093947,some students wouldnt like the topic or the teacher would want them to include certain things students might not know how to do or would like to include in their project. This will also give them less freedom of choosing there style of project. Teacher based projects would also be more educational based off of things they teach and wouldnt intrest students and it would be msot likely not turned in by the end of summer. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f270a4fe032a,082E19093947,Students would do a project on a topic they want to know more about and intrested in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c50589a38ee,082E19093947,"If the project were to be teacher based, most students wouldn't be intrested in it, therefore, some students wouldn't want to do the project and will have the lack of wanting to learn about something that doesn't intrest them and make it a chore. Making a student choose a topic for their project would, make them choose something they're intrested in and they will most likely have a project ready to turn in at the end of summer. Student would also complete the project with more detail instead of not having any at all. All the projects would be different subject and more unique letting students choose so teachers can make sure students learned. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff3b9f780242,082E19093947,Some students have summer jobs or go travel to different location's ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abfe38e49746,082E19093947,When student's are given the choice of choosing their own school project they will have less of a chance of forgetting that they have to do one or forgetting what they have learned about ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+69fee98034da,082E19093947,This will also give them a chance on choosing what style of what of project they want. They could do it on paper or poster or power point and many more. Students coud also base it off of the schedule they have or the days that are free. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44773b4967d6,082E19093947,Student based projects would be more likely done then teacher based projects. Students would do them off of things they are interested in and subjects that catch their attention. They will do it around there time frame and in any style they want. doing it student based will have students educate them selves about things they enjoy and love to do on daily bases and teachers will have something turned in to them by the end of summer. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f25b7d1bb6fa,0839B4ACC2AF,"Summer projects are given to students so they can continue to learn and not fall behind in the coming school year. But would it help if the summer projects are created by teachers? Well yes, teachers have been teaching and making projects for a long time and they would know what they are doing. As a high school student I could prefer that my teacher makes the projects verse some student who not much of an expert on the topic.  ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f8191ae1bf28,0839B4ACC2AF,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+63e2d5ada58a,0839B4ACC2AF,"they have more experience, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+066648f22959,0839B4ACC2AF,"the project can be less confusing, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c2aba85d68f0,0839B4ACC2AF,the project can give the student an insight of what the class will be like. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8351a520df8d,0839B4ACC2AF,"With so much experience and training they would know how to design a project that will allow the students to continue to learn through out the summer. For example, I am taking AP chemistry and there was a summer assignment. This assignment was created by the teacher and it was easy to comprehend and do. This made my experience with working on the project much more productive and less time consuming. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+06aa554e38d0,0839B4ACC2AF,"Many of the projects that I have done were mostly teacher-designed and they were easy to understand and finish without too many hurdles. If there were to be any confusion it would be much easier to contact the teacher about a question than a student. When there are less mistakes in the project it would be more time effective and one would be able to finish the project faster. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97c49450a8fc,0839B4ACC2AF,"This would help students to be prepared for the coming year and they would also know what to expect. For instance, when I had received a summer project for AP statistics as I was doing the project I was able to understand more about what statistic is and how the class work would be like. However, if a student were to create the project it might not have given a picture of how the class would be like through out the year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+880ad5576106,0839B4ACC2AF,schools should have summer projects that are designed by teachers. This way students would be more benefited due to the teachers knowledge on the topic. When the teachers do create the project there will be more clarity on what the student should do. The students will also be able to get a feel of the class in the coming year.  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f6755cb29e70,083FA95E5371,"Luke joined the program. He decided to because his freiend offered it to him.
+
+Also it was a once and a lifetime opportunity for him. He kenw he couldn't past up the opportunity. Luke also joined because he wanted to help people after World War ll.
+
+Some evidence that Luke want to go to the program is? Luke want to go on the ship back and forth from the oceans. Also Luke could be drafted in the miliatry service because he turned 18. Luke said ""The cattle-boat trip were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy."" Also it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to China.
+
+The conclussion to the story is? Luke want to join the program. Some evidence that Luke said is ""I'm grateful for the opportunity."" Also Luke said ""It made me more aware of people of there countries and their needs.""
+
+Finally Luke said that the awareness stayed with him. Which help leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0bdf324745b5,085BDFC05337,They are sayin how to detect other people feeling. How other people feel. The software of some new computer that recognize emotions. Can they like calculate emotions like math homework ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+412aa3f13403,085BDFC05337,i think they can not calculate emotions like a math homework. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5b7632fc9699,085BDFC05337,"Your frontalis pars lateralis muscle above your eyes raises your eyebrows when you're surpised your orbicularis oris around your mouth tightens your lip to show anger. The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. They would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy worried etc.
+
+Computers know when your happy or sad if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow but if you frown the next ad will be different. Most human communication is nonverbal inculding emotional communication so computers need to know that to. You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. A computer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.
+
+According to the facial feedback theory of Emotion moving your facial emotions, but also may even help produce them. Putting on a happy face actually works a renowned drama coach had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+888c559a6895,086603D5B319,"It's 9pm, you haven't finished your homework. You would've finished your homework, if you had the choice to go straight home. However, the extra curricular you have to participate in, took too much time. That's the view of a student, if they would have to participate in a extracurricular activity. Students would have no time to play their Xbox, and have no time to finish that 8 paragraph essay, if they had to participate in a extracurricular activitiy ",Lead,Effective,,,
+466833f05fdf,086603D5B319,". I don't agree that students should be forced to take one extracurricular activity, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7f295aca0709,086603D5B319,it makes students do something they don't like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e854c03553a2,086603D5B319,"makes students have no time for homework, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4440faa93aa7,086603D5B319,does not allow students to go home and have time to breath. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5421bb9f8a78,086603D5B319,"Extracurricular activities, are for people who want to be in that activity, or feel interested in it. If student's aren't interested in that activity, then why should they be forced to do it? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e6eed6c2cf77,086603D5B319,How would you feel if you had to be on the basketball team but you don't even like basketball? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2494df53812,086603D5B319,Extracurricular activities would also make students stay up at 10pm to finish their homework ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a1b235fc73a,086603D5B319,They would make students more overwhelmed with homework ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc8c9cb32fbc,086603D5B319,students wouldn't get a break from school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2edd7ee6fec,086603D5B319,"Students want to get out of stressful school, and go home, but the extracurricular activitie abolishes that opportunity. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62b493dbba69,086603D5B319,"if the principal forced students to do extracurricular activities, it would make students more stressed out then they should be. If students don't like the activity they have to do, why do they have to take that activity? The poor students wouldn't have time to breath, and go home. Students relaxing time would be school time, so which one do you choose? Forcing students to live under school, or allow students to have their own life after school, with no consequences.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e87b12d2ac3b,08A6AD8C775B,If it were a real martian creation then you would be able to see possible life forms around it ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+664d1021b10c,08A6AD8C775B,"and it wouldn't be facing towards the sky, it would be like a statue, plus it would have been a really fantastic descovery and we would try to make contact with the martians and see how they live and survive on the planet so we could possibly live there one day. NASA would send space crafts and rovers to Mars so we could study the creatures. Finding out how to survive on mars and the other planets is important and is something humans should learn how to do just in case if something happens to earth and we aren't able to go back to it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3eeee873427,08A6AD8C775B,"But as you can see in the pictures it's just a messa, a natural cause in nature, something that happens on earth, but it just so happened to look so much like a face from the possible clouds and blurry picture from the first ",Position,Adequate,,,
+def61ded611e,08A6AD8C775B,"Many people at NASA want wanted that to be a statue or something that a living creaturs has made, but as you see in the pictures it starts to look more like a natural cause of natural cause. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df308b06ff2e,090D5AC33481,"Phones and Driving, should it be a thing? Today over 5 billion people own a mobile device, and a little over 1 billion own some sort of vehicle.
+
+These are two of the things people feel they need in life. But maybe the use of both at once is a bit too overwhelming. Driving while texting, or even making a phone call is excessive. It can be dangerous and hurt people in multiple ways ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4681d2550939,090D5AC33481,"Phone usage while driving should be prohibited in every state, country and continent! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a883a60c1dad,090D5AC33481,"Using a phone while driving a vehicle should not be allowed anywhere! It can cause many accidents. It can also bring troubles and pain to ones family. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b9386f6005c,090D5AC33481,"For example, in February 2018, a 17 year old in Alabaster, Alabama killed a ten year old and her father in an accident because the teen was texting while driving. If the teen would have been paying attention to the road and not their phone the accident maybe could have been prevented. Not saying all accidents are caused by phone use, but a majority of them are. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+36a13d1683e8,090D5AC33481,Generally there are 1.6 million crashes involving texting and driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1e5e776d75f,090D5AC33481,"Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents involving texting and driving. 4,637 people died in the year 2018 because of the accidents. If that does not scare one into not using their phone while driving, then I don't know what will. This is one of the many reasons why I believe driving and the use of a phone should be banned! 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4dfbaf6f02de,090D5AC33481,Another reason cell phone use while driving should be banned, if adults use their phone while operating a vehicle their children will possibly be strongly influenced by it. ,Claim,Effective,,
+0b3bb064b7a4,090D5AC33481,"The children will start to think it is okay to do so. It is the year 2019 and all that this generation raves about is having a car and the newest IPhone if we are taught that it is okay to text and drive, someone can earnestly get hurt by these actions. Most accidents involve teen driving, we don't want to give them another reason to be absentminded while driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+53297b1e0c8a,090D5AC33481,"The use of a mobile device while operating a vehicle should be prohibited. Now is the time to admit that driving while using a phone or any mobile devices is dangerous! You wouldn't want you or a loved one to end up critically injured, dead or disabled. Phone usage while driving is one of the many reasons accidents happen everyday. You can always wait until you are out of the car to make that call or answer that text !   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b50a54358314,09133053C474,I'm Luke Bomberger I am part of the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5c69d2936a37,09133053C474,I think you should join too ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dfbcba259ead,09133053C474,It's fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c88e5541bda,09133053C474,"you do a lot of activities such as baseball, vollyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading and, whittling on the way back. You play the games where the animals used to be. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2c1cf8d1dc21,09133053C474,You also get to see a lot of wonderful places. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae79eb10c685,09133053C474,"I've traveled to China and Europe. I saw the Acropolis in Greece, I took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy where the streets were water, I've toured an excavated castle in Crete, and saw the Panama Canal on my way to China. We actually do have time to see places on our way to places. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64db004ed267,09133053C474,It opens the world up to you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd6d70ab3a5b,09133053C474,It's a life changing opportunity. I'm very gratefull I have that opportunity. It made me more aware of the countries in need and that awareness has always sayed with me. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d2e2aeeb928,09133053C474,That is why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c3707b440343,0961B819A4E9,I would agree to computers that can identify humans emotions would be pretty cool for our inverment. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4966d2d7da1d,0961B819A4E9,it would change our inverment becaus ealot of people can just go to a computer and if the happy or sad it would say ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68d9b7a7c663,0961B819A4E9,"I think that it would be good, because the people that hate computer would probably end up liking it. It would give them something new to learn on ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc36f1b2f171,0961B819A4E9,It can also recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fc0218b2a88,0961B819A4E9,"Mr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions, and they are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) will tighten your lips to show anger. The same technology can make computer- animathed faces more expressive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fefdea8f580a,0961B819A4E9,"Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emothins, but it also may help produce them ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+abf9ce144f43,0961B819A4E9,You can feel other peoples emotional. it may happen becasue they unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dcef369fd34c,0961B819A4E9,"this is why i think it would be a good idea to make computers that can see how someone is feeling. If there sad,or mad. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c34ab25756f1,09770DECD26C,I think that students should do at least one extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54e17fdd940a,09770DECD26C,A extracurricular activity is a great way to kill time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f3b345d6956,09770DECD26C,First I will talk about advantages to the students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33c4f98da785,09770DECD26C,First advantage is that the kids can get more exercise and not be just lazy all the time. Another advantage is the kids can meet new people and make new friends. If its something that they like to do it can boost their mood. They might also become better problem solvers. Those are advantages to the students. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+404503fb5714,09770DECD26C,Second I will talk about the advantages to the teachers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+775cd772a982,09770DECD26C,First advantage to teachers is they get to teach about something that they love. They get to know more about the kids and what they like. They could also learn something new themselves if the kids know something that the teachers don't. those are advantages to the teachers that teach extracurricular activities. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f2f9f03d240,09770DECD26C,Last I will talk about advantages to the parents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0868af748809,09770DECD26C,"The parents get to do more things by themselves like running errands and just spend time alone. It is also less time for their kid to annoy them. It could also make them feel good that there kid is doing something other than being lazy. Last it could also teach the parents something new about the extra curricular activity. Those are the advantages for the parents of kids doing the activity. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2639324f7ebc,09770DECD26C,Those are all my reasons why I think kids should do at least one extracurricular activity. My essay also shows that not just the kids have the advantages but the teachers and parents to do.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d2284059d0a,099985A2A99C,the author article about studying venus is good. My opnion is that we should study Venus because that can be a good thing for us ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f4a4fd5060a7,099985A2A99C,because if something goies wrong here maybe we can use Venus so we can go live over there. Its good that we should study it so they can see that needs to be done and we need to survive if we ever have to leave earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cd76997a994,099985A2A99C,"I read in the article that is dangerous because they are lava and earthquakes and venus has the hottest surface temperature in any planet . i rad it on paragraph 3 line 10 "" venus has the hottest surface termaperatures of any planet in out solar system"". i read about the volcanos and eraquakes on paragraph 3 line 13 "" erupting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7a4eae7a573,099985A2A99C,"they refer venus like "" the earths twin"" if they call me like that is for a reason maybe it can really be like the earth a place where humans can live there without a problem. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbc02450ab33,099985A2A99C,"Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus> Its on paragraph 3 line 1 "" A thick atmosphere of amost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus"". the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. Its on paragraph 3 line 3. So its really dangerous but if they want to study it its for a reason maybe there is things they are can do to fix it so it can be a good place where humans can live, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7769a1ae7f74,099985A2A99C,We should study Venus is a perfect oppurtunity for us to study new planets and see what we can do to have another safe planet. Its gonna be dangerous but i believe that we have the right tools and the right equiment to go over there and we have really good machines so they can work in there .    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+685fc575f97b,09D40BD05847,"In society techolgy is almost every thing to people. People around the world hundred, thousands worth of technology, lots of people spend more money on technology than they clothes. So to me I think having technology makes people happy. Having technology to see if it makes them happy is kinda of point less to me ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+723d85e86c96,09D40BD05847,There is nothing the Facial Action Coding could do for people in the world if you ask me. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b1417052a212,09D40BD05847,Putting up Ads that is based off your emotion is not a smart idea to me ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d0b1a812373,09D40BD05847,"So if im angry im most likely will have a negative vibe and if you put something up that is close to be negative its not going to make me happy. If I am in a good mood more than likely I would not want to see no Ad. Then there expression is compared against a neutral face, some people just look naturally mad. If some one regular face looks mad then how would it read ther face then, that person could be happy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a8e47324857,09D40BD05847,I think the Facial Action Coding System is a waste of time. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+559eeee0cfa4,09DB075C4ACE,Every teacher should use this in their class room because the teacher could see what each student is feeling inside ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4557fecb9208,09DB075C4ACE,"Also the teacher could see if the student is learning,listening, or even liking what the subject is ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf8a0d62c51d,09DB075C4ACE,"It says ""moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them''. I think that is very true and hopefully it would make people more happy and not feel like they are nothing. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42ac4ed5d1aa,09DB075C4ACE,If people could make enough of the Facial Action Coding System for the schools all around the world. I think that would make a big difference on people not lieing about how the feel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+895a0d73f12a,09DB075C4ACE,It would help people be better with computers if the computers understand howthe person if feeling. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11fbc2a61026,09DB075C4ACE,It would me a great game too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8de94b76489,09DB075C4ACE,You try to make the other person try to guess your emotion and the computer would tell you if they got it right or not ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df8949b06ec5,09DB075C4ACE,"I think this would be really good to get out to schools to show them how to see different emotions about people and like i said before, it would make a great game. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1ab1030c639a,0A5B8761B187,Disagree ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c31923fc7fac,0A5B8761B187,I think that if a students have to let them do it not because them say u got to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55372759ebbd,0A5B8761B187,some people can not do some thing like some people can not do sports like working want people some work just there self some teacher don't do activity the principal don't why should the student do some just not that good what. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dd417b39b1d4,0A5B8761B187,Activity thing some just not for everyone cut out for the workout to play sports. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4dbba7c9463,0A5B8761B187,It good to play do activiy but it a lot thing to do outside have fun or some we young sports is fun to but no one want to be and a hot gym half of the day out of energy when you get home you get home you going want to go to bed going to want to eat and sleep that it now activty a lot eat and sleep that it now activty a lot of work some don't like now who want sit after scool to do some work  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2929f3867c66,0A618B980D2D,I would join this program because I can help people in needs and I could travel and see things that I wanted to see a long time ago I could travel all around the world all day every day of the week. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c7c741ef126f,0A618B980D2D,I like to support Luke for being brave to go out in the bigh world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2112db79e7b,0A618B980D2D,he just got out of high school and he only lives in a small town were very few pepole live. That is the reason i would like to do that program see u next ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+22ed56154254,0A618B980D2D,I support Lukes claims because they are very useful for the activty that he is duing ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2aa5f3fed268,0A618B980D2D,i personnaly support Luke for caring because he didn't have to help people survive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59474ed29a4d,0A618B980D2D,Luke is a very brave person and i support him for that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+327e1d23624f,0A618B980D2D,i like Luke if he was ral or if he is i would like to meet him in person to say how much he helped those people he is a very good person to others. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da366deadae7,0A618B980D2D,I would join this program to help Luke and save lifes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16a565a61644,0A618B980D2D,I really like Luke he seems like a very helpful person and very succesful in life he didn't give up on school or those animals or the people who needed him to help and they probaly thank him for what he has done. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+570ad5743cf4,0A618B980D2D,I like the fact that the program teachs you resopnsabilty in life ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3eea124f22ff,0A618B980D2D,how you can't just think about your self and think about others to and be helpful to others and that is just what Luke did he cared for the other people and not just himself and he cared for animals cause if Luke and Don wouldn't have saved them animals they would be dead or extinct. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd26616a742a,0AB5C0C20670,"Mona Lisa Smile she is 83 percent happy,9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful, and 2 percent anger. Mona Lisan Smile her emotional is less because here happy is hight and not low. She have being sad but she have being mad. Her anger was 2 percent that is less. She have more emotional smiling. But she have a little fearful. Mona Lisa Smile at last according to the some new computer software that can recognize her emotions. Thomas Huang, ge tge beckmqn institute for Advanced Science at the University of lllinois, working in collaboration with the Prof. Nicu sebe he are the Universitycof tge Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at the developing vetter ways for the human and computers to communicate. And they was talking about the calulate emotions like a math homework? and how can they computers the recongnize of the subtle facial movements. And they have the humans use to express how we feel. And they was staring making comuter constructs a 3-D computer nodel of the face; all the 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. And movement of the one more muscles is called an""action unit."" Than Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of tge FACS ( Facial Action Coding System). And theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only Expresses emotions, but also the may even help produce them. May happen because they unconsciously imitata another person of the facial expressions. And whoever thought of that making faces could reveal so much abouf the scepience of the emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65a8f1bc4c01,0ABF4F99E166,"There is a saying that goes as this; ""You can't make everyone happy."" One would typically use this saying if an action they make improves the situation for one person, but creates a worse situation for another. However, if Professor Thomas Huang's new 'Facial Action Coding System' proves to be what he says it can be, then Huang believes that there actually is a way to make everyone happy, even in the school setting. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+da693397195e,0ABF4F99E166,The implementation of technology able to read the emotional expressions of children in the classroom is valuable for both the teachers and the students. ,Position,Effective,,,
+a68b220b794b,0ABF4F99E166,"Inside a school classroom, there is no doubt that it is hard to please everyone. Therefor, when a student becomes disengaged from the lesson, they often become bored and fall behind in the class. After-all, all students learn differently, so it is inevitable that some of the students will become disengaged. However, with his new technology, Professor Huang predicts that the ""classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f07c1f79341,0ABF4F99E166,"With this technology implemented, anytime a student starts to fall behind during the lesson, the computer could make slight adjustments to the teacher's plans to help redirect the student back on track. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bc597f39a7ea,0ABF4F99E166,"It is common knowledge that the more a student falls behind in a class, the harder it becomes to catch up, which in turn makes the student fall behind even more. It is a viscious cycle that all stems from a day of not paying attention that could be averted by this technology ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d884f81d270c,0ABF4F99E166,"This technology could also help both students and teachers in a long-term manner. In paragraph 7 of the article, it is revealed that this new technology could ""even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one"" (Paragraph 7). Say there is a classroom without an emotion-sensing computer. In the classroom there is a student who, behind the fake smile is dealing with something that they cannot tackle on their own. The teacher never notices, and the child goes on without help. Now imagine if there was a computer in that class ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7505cfe5542,0ABF4F99E166,"Once it sensed the troubling expressions on the child's face, it could flag down the teacher and alert him or her to the students problem, resulting in the child getting the counceling he or she needs. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+23035c9296fe,0ABF4F99E166,"The amount of improvement a classroom could see if this technology was implemented correctly would be immeasurable. The system could prevent students from falling behind in class because they cannot relate to how the teacher is teaching, and the technology could see through fake expressions hiding more troubled thoughts. With this sort of system, it may actually be possible to ""make everyone happy.""    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+271ec6c78981,0ACB0E08934E,"The ""Facial Action Coding System"" is technology that can be used in the class room because some people can't figure out how good or bad someone is feeling. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f29f26a0f9e4,0ACB0E08934E,Teachers will be able to know if the student is learning or eithor not paying attention or sleeping in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9ef47002565,0ACB0E08934E,It'll be easier for them to know what's false and what's true expression in their situation they could be in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a09246e2edd,0ACB0E08934E,In difference in the situation students can't understand someone's expression. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f9e7bdcd0f6f,0ACB0E08934E,Thanks to the technolgy now it'll be easier to figure out students emotion or anyone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00ffd72ef850,0ACB0E08934E,"The article states, "" Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.""""The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c641b2a2113b,0ACB0E08934E,"Finally, yes the technology is worth a big margin but its worth to have the help we can all get to help us know many. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+62881654075c,0ACB0E08934E,"In my opinion it'll be a better way to learn/read better on our emotional expressions because you""'ll have more information and could know more about everything you want or need to know about the expressions. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. We humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" every day, for instance, you can probably tell how a person is feeling simply by the look on their face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b8ef623dfa6,0AD7535C58C0,"The national safety council estimates that 1.4million accidents occur every year due to people using their cell phones. 200,000 of those accidents alone are from texting and driving. How some people believe that texting and driving needs to be closely monitored because of the risk it involves. While other people think that it's alright to use your phone while driving as long as you keep glancing at the road as you are replying to your text ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5157df3b8808,0AD7535C58C0,"This negatively affects teens and their society, and should be strictly avoided. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0451e6cac6f6,0AD7535C58C0,"Using your cell phone causes many distractions for your eyes, your mind, and your actions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+23e981c3d7b6,0AD7535C58C0,"It is easily possible for your eyes to slip off the road. Therefore, instead of your eyes locking in on your phone they should be locked on watching your speed, the road and the traffic. At the same time, while driving your mind can only process so much. In addition, your minds need to focus on one thing while driving and that is the road. Simultaneously, the usage of your phone while driving makes your unaware of the happenings that may occur on the road. Current health teens a recent magazine advises when you aren't on the road there's a great danger of missing something pay attention listen because it only takes a matter of time before you get in a wreck. Concentrating is important while driving and breaking the concentrating cause a risk for an accident if you're on the phone tell that person you are driving and that you will call them back later. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+283fb82396c0,0AD7535C58C0,Texting while driving not only endangers yourself but other people on the road as well ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8d6e778536af,0AD7535C58C0,"Texting while driving can limit your response to someone coming out of nowhere, whether if it's a child, an adult, or a group of teens. When having less time to respond to something in the road while texting and driving it may lead to many accidents and deaths. In addition, the usage of your phone while driving can cause a dangerous environment to the people around you on the road. Anyone can walk into the road at any time of the day and staying off your phone prevents anyone including yourself from getting hurt. In the same way, texting while driving causes many dangers risking not only young teens lives, but also adults lives in future accidents. Texting while driving ""causes own deaths and others, and need to pay attention to what's going on"". Meanwhile, while driving needs to be taken more serious you never know what to expect on the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a686fedef880,0AD7535C58C0,There are many simple solutions to stop texting while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a02353a6b74e,0AD7535C58C0,"You can avoid texting while driving by texting before you drive. You can avoid texting while driving by texting before you drive. Henceforth, having safe driving habits all start with keeping both hands on the wheel, eyes on the road and mind focused on what's happening. Moreover, texting and driving may have a reachable desire but there is a solution by placing your phone out of reach. Above all, placing your phone out of reach helps you pay attention to driving instead of wondering what your messages says. Additionally, to prevent texting while driving simply ignore your phone by turning it off. Drivers safety websites notes to turn off your cell phone. Let your voicemail capture your voice and text messages. In summary turning your cell phone off will prevent any possible accidents making a safe environment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0961c03f8e39,0AD7535C58C0,"The numbers speak for themselves, too many accidents have occurred as a result of people using cell phones while driving. Lives continue to be endangered when people think they need to get in touch with friends or family. If we can just wait until we get to our destination before having to contact or respond to our message's danger can be avoided and lives will be saved. Always remember think before you pull out your cellphone before you commit a crime think of other people lives      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+803bc4c97317,0B606C33AC4D,"Here in the United States, we have a problem of obesity ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5a50ba9de52,0B606C33AC4D,"more walking would be involved, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6290158b60b6,0B606C33AC4D,make the streets safer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15a90ff5a124,0B606C33AC4D,stop the polution of the air? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00dec2023c50,0B606C33AC4D,"Car-free cities seem to be more safe. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+97e8d1085fb0,0B606C33AC4D,"Obesity is a big problem in the United States. So instead of us just getting excerise of maybe 20 feet to walking to the car, and then the 45 feet to walk to where we need to go. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9328b3460fe1,0B606C33AC4D,"Lets get rid of cars and if you need some where to go, then walk and dont be lazy and get some excerise. Excerise is not bad for you, and is actually very healthy. Walking is also a good way to relieve stress and get things off your mind. Sometimes people get mad or upset while driving adn there emotions get in the way of there driving and it ends up badly. So if we get rid of cars it would also decrease the number of accidents. When your walking and you get upset or mad you wont have to take it out on the car or anyone else around you. Walking instead of driving is a better motive especially when we have a high obesity rate. There are so many people in this world with insecurity issues and instead of them not doing anything about and wanting there parents to drive them to go hang out with there friends or go to the beach or whatever the thing is, walk to your friends house or walk to the beach that way you feel better about yourself when you get there and feel like you accomplished something and feel like you feel better about yourself. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ac5cb3aec0a9,0B606C33AC4D,"In a lot of cities and or countries, there are a lot of ""non-safe"" streets. There are always car accidents, people dying in these car accidents, there used in some kind of violence. Car accidents are one of the most caused death. This is because people are in a rush so they have to do over the speed limit, people driving recklessly and feel that ""oh im cool"" or ""watch me do this"" and ends up in something that they thought at the time wouldnt of happened because they thought they had control. So if getting rid of cars would deffinetly dramatically decrease the number of deaths we have just by getting rid of the cars.  Just think of how many lives will be saved! Most of the time thefts are not captured because they always have a run away vehicle to get a way. If we stop using cars, what are they gonna use to get a way? If they try using public transportation to get away, with other people on the bus, he would look suspicious, and get caught. The streets would be a lot safer, especially for adults that have children. Children get snatched up in what? A bicicyle? No, a car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bc4969d9d7c,0B606C33AC4D,"it would be a lot safer for kids and teenagers to go out and have a good time and not worry about a lot going around them. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa9c65cde94e,0B606C33AC4D,We already have more pollution problems then we need. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6369f95398e6,0B606C33AC4D,"People just dont care anymore about how or where they live and they will just throw any kind of trash they want on the ground. So driving cars just helps the people already littering, the cars are just polluting the air we breathe. So instead of us Americans not giving a crap about what were doing to the wonderful beautiful planet we live on, we should start, and help, but not driving the things that pollute are air. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53a0afc3eaec,0B606C33AC4D,"In a result of limiting car usage, Mr. Goldberg says "" Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role."" So this means that by approving it this year, there will be more public transportation then people driving there personal cars. Getting rid of cars would decrease a lot of the problems we have now. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+620f43230338,0B606C33AC4D,"Some of you might think, ""well what if we work for a living and need to get to work?"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+06fab521a2f3,0B606C33AC4D,"Well, you can awlays WALK to the public transportation area. Studies have shown that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses. This leaves us wondering, ""Has Obama passed peak driving?"" ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6ddb9071d916,0B606C33AC4D,"Is it gonna make us get lower in obesity, make the streets safer, and stop the pollution of the air? Getting rid of cars will decrease a lot of issues that we have in the world today, so getting rid of or decreasing the car-usage is a positive, not a negative.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+af23c7b9c97d,0B81C3067FF2,"That the author did good job at explan the evidences like he saws, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7cf73f8c112f,0B81C3067FF2,"""Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a veicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditition by staying up and ount of their way"" That it is imported to study Venus even if it dangers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e2f781c119ad,0B81C3067FF2,"Venus ounce look like earth, like ""Earth-like planet in our solar system ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc9426fc608a,0B81C3067FF2,"Long age, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" That it tells us that it you'st to be livible. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+384bc05d9775,0B81C3067FF2,Venus is a challenging planet to study ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f57661d05705,0B81C3067FF2,"like it saws, ""numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us."" Venus is a challenging to travel to even if it so close. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a796141bb24,0B81C3067FF2,Traveling to Venus isn't imposible ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8dd9a37c4025,0B81C3067FF2,"like it saws, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginatin and innovation."" It is posible to trave to Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fcd4ffe77134,0B81C3067FF2,"Venus is a challenging planet, that we like to study about and learn how it was formed. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd7df123f926,0B87B0B3278C,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it may present. The author then goes on to tell us all of his facts that back up his claim ",Position,Adequate,,,
+eaa0c8b8cc97,0B87B0B3278C,I believe the author makes a very good point. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da74a38ab8b8,0B87B0B3278C,"In paragraph 4 the author tells us even though Venus's surface had conditions five times more extreme than what we see on Earth, long ago it was covered with large oceans, rocky sediment and craters. If Venus's conditions used to be so similar to Earth then could it possibly have supported life? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+261ed0a975d7,0B87B0B3278C,"In paragraph 7 the author goes to tell us that scientists over at NASA have some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus like conditions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de1ec5b18a04,0B87B0B3278C,"If we can somehow develop the technology to last in Venus like conditions wouldn't it be worth it to see what mysteries it holds. We have the technology at our fingertips, all we have to do is put in the time and effort to get to Venus.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3eee9aceab20,0B8A0777A6E5,limiting car usage could be a good thing for some people. only if they like to walk and do fun things with their lives. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b03ba1f18336,0B8A0777A6E5,it saves people lots of money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+696fbc8373a3,0B8A0777A6E5,"They could have bigger and better things because they wouldnt have to pay a car note, or pay for gas every week ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80bca0992771,0B8A0777A6E5,"Having a life without a car can sometimes be a bit scary exspecially if you need to do ,or be somewhere in the middle of the night . you may be ill and need a doctor immedialty you wouldnt be able to walk . ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+573458b63e39,0B8A0777A6E5,But lets look on the positive side we do have ambulances and things of that sort so we really dont have that much to worry about. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d14d53cd1594,0B8A0777A6E5,the most important part of this is that we have to be safe. and do things the right way ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+31db09e20034,0B8A0777A6E5,I think NO cars is a good things saves me more money for shopping and the finer things in life. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0cf2e9982192,0B8A0777A6E5,i also wouldnt have to beg my parents to take me anywhere because i would be my own transportation.    ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ead763ee2857,0BB223A348F6,When does school end? It doesn't because of teachers who give students hard assignments to do over summer break. Summer projects are a fun way to engage students in learning over their 2 month break. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+96762aa13b6c,0BB223A348F6,it should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6696f10dc36,0BB223A348F6,"let students gain leadership skills, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e7869ac1996b,0BB223A348F6,let them express their creativity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+47e9042e2006,0BB223A348F6,"One of the many needed traits in life is leadership and is gained from setting a goal and reaching it. Leadership is an important trait because it shows your character and is necessary in a workplace. An example of a student-designed project is the Science Fair. The Science Fair allows students to choose a project of their own and complete it for a grade. The Science Fair is a perfect example of successful student led projects which also help gain leadership. Another example of a student-designed project is the MYP assignment. The MYP assignment is assigned to 10th graders, in Virginia, and are supposed to make a project from scratch. Their project is allowed to be anything they want and in any format which helps the students gain leadership skills when they finish. Important traits like leadership are gained from student-designed projects ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+06530ba67eb7,0BB223A348F6,"A student that loves cars will try more on a project they designed about cars then a teacher telling them to design a project about Anatomy. Also, if a student knows a lot about a specific topic then it would be easier to write about it compared to a topic they have almost no knowledge of. For example, if I know almost everything that has to do with Poker then I would rather write about that instead of computers which I know nothing about. During the summer, many students will be on vacation with their families. The summer is the one time students get a long relaxing break and are free from work. Summer projects assigned by teachers can be stressful and confusing at times which is why it should be a student-designed project. Students designing their own project would allow them to work on it at their own time and do it at a comfortable pace. Creativity is an important skill which students should be allowed to express. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8f0cdf12a54f,0BB223A348F6,Teachers-designed projects would allow students to have a baseline of where to start from. One positive of teacher-designed projects would be they are professionally designed (by the Teacher). ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7111ba2aa7f0,0BB223A348F6,"However, many teachers assign projects without thinking of the difficulty or issues that students could face. What if a student doesn't know anything about the topic? Well the teachers expects them to learn it themselves which is another reason giving students the ability to choose for them self is a good idea. A project designed by the teacher can take longer than they expect if students aren't fully educated about the topic. Consequently, this leads to students wasting more of their summer from trying to learn about then complete the teachers project. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+abe867447c00,0BB223A348F6,"student-designed projects are more beneficial than teacher designed projects. They both have pros however the positives of student-designed projects outweigh the teachers. Projects designed by students allow them to gain leadership skills, and let them explore their curiosity or creativity.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ed32b0ad1ee4,0BD82CC1FC8C,Dr. Huang stated that his computer can identify a persons feeling just by scaning them. By the way it look the computer can verify a person experssions by the way that they look even thou some poeple in this world can understand expressions but techology is change and now it can nearly tell human emotion. But yet the differences here are that the computer can see emotions or no emotions at all. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5d91d88baffd,0BD82CC1FC8C,Well the step to take in order to see if a person is showing emotions it would muscular action units. For the instruction 1&2 will determin that techology can tell which from which like a smile canbe tested by a computer or a real person. A machine can tell the difference. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1c12c96323b5,0BD82CC1FC8C,We need to look at the prons and cons cause a person can tell if a person is showing any emotion is how they are useing their mouth's muscular actions such as smiling or frowning. Telling a force one a real smile can be que trickey but a computer can tell the differences. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ec35221a0c5d,0BDD43321AFD,"Remember in elementary school you used to get summer reading logs and checks on books you were 'required' to read during your break? Some students never had a problem with these types of assignments because they loved to read any chance they could get. Unfortunately, there were also the kids who would dread reading and give up after ten minutes or pretend they did the entire assignment. Though at this age, it really didn't matter whether or not you did the reading logs, it was just a little nudge your school would give you to do summer learning. However, when students reach higher levels of school, especially around high school, the requirement of summer projects is actually a requirement. Lots of students complain that it is unfair to do assignments over the one, long break they receive, but depending on the class subject it is for, sometimes these projects are essential. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c5e9a723847b,0BDD43321AFD,"Schools must be aware that if summer projects are always going to be required, the assignments should be student-designed ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d44b382522af,0BDD43321AFD,students will have more urge to do them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c3373b8e4c3,0BDD43321AFD,"sometimes the projects can interfere with summer plans, making it troublesome to get work done. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a30ff3873aaa,0BDD43321AFD,"Summer is the only substantially long break that students receive off of homework, assignments and tests. Through the months of August until June, school does not cease. Almost every week, robotic-like students must wake up early Monday morning, suffer through eight hours of sitting and listen to a teacher go on about something like, why did the War of 1812 happen, how to dissect a frog, or solve for x. Five days are filled with this repeating schedule with two days to spare, and in my experience one of those days is set aside for weekend homework. No matter how much someone loves school and learning, eventually they need a break. Summer is the time to cut loose, hang out with friends, travel somewhere you've never been before and relax. Almost everyone has seen in a movie how students throw their books and papers up in the air as soon as that last day bell rings. Imagine receiving a final project the last day of school, requiring students to turn in on the first day of their next year of school. Now if that project was teacher-designed it might require a student to: 'write an eight page essay on the effects of propaganda use in your society' or 'create a tri-fold and 3-D display of a past, indigenous, tribe's village'. Just picturing these assignments make some people cringe. However, if summer projects were student-designed, people could create a piece of work that interests them and hopefully enables them to put in more effort on the assignment because it wouldn't feel as much like a school task ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22b2ea695630,0BDD43321AFD,"Student-designed projects could focus on what students question or wonder about in their day to day lives, peaking their interests and making the task feel more fun and creative. Students could receive a broad outline like 'write an essay' or 'create a display', and turn it into a unique piece that expresses themselves; something like a paper on endangered animals. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+18804a7dfc06,0BDD43321AFD,"During summer a lot of trips and vacations are taken whether with family or friends, near or far. Nevertheless, each one requires people to leave their homes and travel with the minimal amount necessary to save space. In my experience, I once was gone for almost the entire summer. One week I was in Pennsylvania with my relatives and the next I was swimming in the crystal clear waters of the Bahamas. Now imagine if these vacations, no matter how long the duration, were to be taken away from students because of a teacher-designed, summer project. If one was to receive a project of this type, there is no way of telling how much time or the location required to get it done. For example, if teachers were to design a summer research paper on the history of where you live, it might be necessary to go to the public library to view history records. No one can do that or go there if they're skiing all the way in Colorado. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5a2eee6a4a3c,0BDD43321AFD,Student-designed projects allow students to create a work period and timing schedule for when doing the assignment works best for them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b7fe780a3bf,0BDD43321AFD,"Some, especially teachers, might argue that having students design their own summer projects will lead to the minimal work necessary and a poorly done assignment. Teachers might say that students are primarily focused on their summers and just having fun, rather than getting something done that could benefit them in their next school yea ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b1fac8fb8f84,0BDD43321AFD,"However, if the project is required for school, that typically means it is graded. Students won't try to do the least amount work possible just to save them time, if that means they will earn a D on the project. They will start the year off poorly. The overall effect of the project will outweigh how much time and effort is put into it. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+762b03efb36b,0BDD43321AFD,"Overall, student-designed projects would be more beneficial for both teachers and students because these types of assignments create a unique idea of who you are as a person because it shows individual interests. If a project was deemed boring and just based on facts, teachers would be more likely to receive non creative and possibly plagiarized work. Students wouldn't care to try their best because this one task is taking time out of their long awaited break from school. In addition, student-designed projects also allow teachers assigning them, to have a sense of who their incoming students are, based on their projects. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+46f58858850a,0BF9F64D6FD1,"Students across all age groups look forward to the last day of school, the day summer vacation begins. From the endless memories summer entails, to the exciting, fun experiences, summer vacation is one of the most beneficial times for students. For many high school students, teachers assign summer assignments or projects that relate to a class they may be taking in the upcoming school year. These assignments tend to require an expansive amount of time and also tend to be rather ineffective. In the summer students want to fill their time with exciting activities that they would enjoy. We live in the age of self exploration with some the most inquisitive students, but we still conform to the age old summer assignment system. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+56536c118079,0BF9F64D6FD1,"In a new modern classroom setting, students should have the liberty to design their own summer projects ",Position,Effective,,,
+eb9c9c0f803b,0BF9F64D6FD1,"because students are more inclined to learn when they have the liberty to decide their work, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+92290bc34513,0BF9F64D6FD1,the process of self exploration is the key to molding successful minds. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+984de5a8cdd6,0BF9F64D6FD1,"When given a task you do not enjoy, most people do either of two things. The first thing they do is rush the task to get it over with, and the second thing they do is push it off as much as they can. Similarly, when a student is given an assignment that is not of interest to them, the quality of work is very low. In reference to the summer, this general idea is heightened; a majority of students tend to push off assignments to the very latest, creating lackluster work and also not learning much from the assignment. Personally, I have experienced this repeatedly. When I was given a summer assignment for my English class this year, I was eager to read the book. While, the book was interesting the assignment was extremely long. The intended goal of the assignment was to expand the knowledge and analysis of the book, but after completing the assignment, I felt like that once held excitement and knowledge was gone. If I had the ability to design my own assignment relating to the book, I most likely would have enjoyed completing the assignment, allowing for an expansion of knowledge. This does not only apply to my experiences with summer assignments, but also applies to my overall experience as a student. When given the liberty to decide my own work, I am not only excited to work, but I am also more dedicated. When my education is in my hands, I produce some of my best work. Currently as a junior enlisted in a self led research class, I have learned so much about myself and the overall topic I am researching. Although at first the task at hand was daunting, I learned how to organize myself effectively and complete a thorough research project that I am happy with. By having the research project on my own, I am constantly thinking about it and I spend more time to work. Giving students the ability to decide their course of work is one of the most beneficial decisions a teacher can make for the future of a student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+425b162eb5e2,0BF9F64D6FD1,"Some of the most successful people are regarded for their fame and success due to self exploration. In Benjamin Franklin's famous autobiography, he shares his experiences through self exploration. Growing up in a poor household, Franklin's father could not afford to send him to a traditional college education, but through Franklin's own personal endeavors and exploration, he became one of America's founding fathers, discovered lightning, and paved a legacy that is still remembered today. Simple self exploration can start with these summer projects. When a student is given their own freedom, remarkable results can follow. The purpose of a curriculum is to mend our future minds into strong, independent thinkers, so by implementing simple strides of self exploration, schools and teachers are able to mold the minds of successful students. In my own experiences, self exploration has made a remarkable impact. When I was 15 I started my first company, learning everything on my own with the help of a few mentors along the way. Not only did I grow as a person, but my knowledge for business also grew tremendously. Through the use of online resources, videos, and contacts, I was able to produce something I am truly proud of. The work I put in, was time I wanted to because I was truly passionate about what I was doing. That passion is what we need to strive for. From simple opportunities for self exploration during the summer to long term projects, as a society we need to move towards encouraging self education and self exploration. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+efce07da0947,0BF9F64D6FD1,"The overall benefit of students having their education in their hands, outweighs the potential negative repercussions. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+98ebd90f6d94,0BF9F64D6FD1,Some may predict that students may slack off when given the opportunity to create their own summer projects. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3c1e34baca6e,0BF9F64D6FD1,"While this is possible, when a student is pushed, surprising results follow. In addition, giving students that necessary push is how we can create a brighter future. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7fd23fc76157,0BFD128F5C01,Hi! Have you ever wanted to find a way to help people and animals when they think they have nothing to live for when they actually do? Do you want to give people food and shelter? Well we got just the right group for you to join! ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e6bc4916c669,0BFD128F5C01,"Join the Seagoing Cowboys program so you can help people in need!
+
+We think that you would be perfect for the program! Here are some reasons why you should join! 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+2eda975a1bb5,0BFD128F5C01,You can help people and animals when needed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+068d648fdd99,0BFD128F5C01,"Trust us there might be a lot of people who need it. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+02ec559e7b58,0BFD128F5C01,"You would also see great places like China, Greece, and other places in Europe! You might get to see the Great Wall of China, too! Wouldn't that be amazing! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4bea5c18f19d,0BFD128F5C01,"You might save lives and meet great people who are talented and smart and would also need you. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3a298730952a,0BFD128F5C01,You get to travel on seas! ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a31515a6bb5d,0BFD128F5C01,"The Alantic Ocean, Pacific Ocean, and others! You might get seasick, but we have some ginger for you that might help. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e943359e7bf4,0BFD128F5C01,"So those are the reasons why we think you should join the program. If you like the idea of all the things that are listed feel free to join! Thank you, and we hope to see you there! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+33e13d16c0d4,0C24337CD49E,In the begin in the story it talks about how she had 83 percent happy and 9 percent digusted smile and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. And that her science teacher had graded her latest lab assignment. And that mona lisa at least according some new computer of showing her emotions. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2e6d4fa8cb4c,0C24337CD49E,"In the body paragraph it talks about how that you have to show your emotions. And the neutral face showing no of there emotions. I wonder why the neutral face does want to show emotions. It will be good if they show emotions. But I think that the neutral face does want to show emotions. Becuase some people might look at them. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f4f2379eb81a,0C24337CD49E,In the conclusion part it talks about how you are suppose to smile. And putting on happy face works. If you make a happy face you are showing your emotions to other people. I think that a lot people should put on there happy face. Becuase they will be showing there emotions to people. I think that some people don't want to smile becuase they don't like to smile. Or they hate to smile in front of people. I wonder why some people don't want to smile. I think that some people don't want to smile in front people. Becuasue they are afraid to smile in front of people. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7fb32bdc9d9e,0C751C31DE85,Would you like to be forced to choose an extracurricular activity that you don't like? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f635fc9c8c9e,0C751C31DE85,The principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3a937170491c,0C751C31DE85,not every students like extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8616e9edf70a,0C751C31DE85,there are not a variety of activities to choose from ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fc0cd2a86bc,0C751C31DE85,some students already participates in some extracurricular activities outside of school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+715f815b915c,0C751C31DE85,"Extracurricular activities are not everyone's favorite, most students would rather do their school work than extracurricular activities.
+
+One reason for that is the amount of work the students are receiving.
+
+The teachers are giving students an extreme amount of work that the student's interest towards extracurricular activities has declined.
+
+A way to fix the problem is to make the lessons less ornate, and more simple. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e0b8232beeb,0C751C31DE85,"The school has some choices for extracurricular activities such as sports, year book, and student council.
+
+There are not many selections that are available for them.
+
+For example, if a student doesn't have a favorite choice, then they would be forced to choose something they don't favor.
+
+That would diminish their view towards school and the principal.
+
+The school can create more choices for the students to pick from, and it could make a difference. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+525cbc74494c,0C751C31DE85,"Extracurricular activities such as swimming which is not possible to be done in school.
+
+I think schools should focus on the main subjects such as Math, Science, and English, and not extracurricular activities.
+
+Even if there are extracurricular activities in school, there should be a choice for it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6edcb5499be7,0C751C31DE85,"In conclusion, the principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea because not every students like extracurricular activity, there are not a variety of activities to choose from, and some students already participates in an extracurricular activities outside of school.
+
+Extracurricular activities should be a choice not a must. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cc186c61fdf4,0C8DFEAE0ADA,I think Luke's point of view of convincing people to go on a Seagoing Cowboy trip. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3c0ce0241a7d,0C8DFEAE0ADA,"The text states
+
+Luke joined the program is it was a once in a lifetime opporortunity. The text states,Luke said why would I pass this up this is anopporortunity of a lifetime. The text alo states, he said being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for him it opened up the world to him. Another thing Luke said is. ""It makes people moreof the other countries in need.
+
+The text states,the cattle boat trip is an unbeliveable opportnity for a small town boy. The text also states,Luke said that awareness stayed with him leading his familly to host a numberofinternational students and exchange visitors for many years. The text also states,Luke found time to have fun on board, especially on the return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Another thing Luke said is he was so grateful for the opportunity.
+
+The text states,Luke got to see all these different countries like china,and Europe. The text also states that Luke got to tour an excavated castle in Crete. Another thing that Luke said is sometimes you won't no when it will happen       ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+72d80bd63901,0C8E8861F91A,I agree with the claim against the value of using this technology to read student's emotional expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fd7ffc09bc4a,0C8E8861F91A,"First off, we perform these calcutions everyday, as we can tell if our friend is happy or sad by looking at their face most of the time. Also, video imagery tells us that the facial emotions for each emotion are universal. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e863cbe6dd6,0C8E8861F91A,"Another big reason is that we really don't know just how much computers can do, it can be where computers detect whether you're happy or sad. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+75193de8c995,0C8E8861F91A,"Performing this calculation every day, we would have trouble describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. However, we can also use human anatomy to help paint precisely enough to convey specific emotions. New computer software has anatomical information as electronic code. Video imagery which is the new emotion-recognition software which tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. The software can detect mixed emotions by weighing the different units. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b5aba2c95e3,0C8E8861F91A,"In a whole, this is a lot to disagree with, since computers are taking over our world now so I believe this is a great idea. Reason being is that we have video imagery, the amazing and undiscovered knowledge of a computer, and our own brains because we calculate expressions on our own every day. These our all major factors that align with the fact that I believe technology should be able to read students' emotional expressions. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cfa772548c4f,0C952AD5C1EA,"In the ""German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", there is a new district that has forbidden street parking, driveways, garages. The residents of this upscale community are suburbans poineers.
+
+In france, there is one street that has a tram that runs to downtown. The tram is only thing that drives on the road. there are 2 places to park, one is you park at a large garage at the end of the development , two is  to buy a space for 40,000 dallors and also a home. 70% of vauban do not own cars and 57% sold there cars. I say they should all have cars and drive on then roads because its easier to get around and faster. they should make deals with everyone because so everyone has a chance to drive. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4921c24f6df,0C952AD5C1EA,", they should not use cars ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cfeea3fa2a44,0C952AD5C1EA,they would have to pay for gas ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c721de9acce1,0C952AD5C1EA,people would cause accidents and get hurt or killed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c3a23c2ec01,0C952AD5C1EA,Cars can be very dangerous and could brake down or cause your life. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b64b09c06e1f,0C952AD5C1EA,They can be expensive and some that you can not afford. Cars can eat your money away just by draveling long distance and always got to check your car before you go anywhere. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bd64c3369a7,0C952AD5C1EA,cars are apart of people lives and every day there will be a car on a road. the united states expanses suburban ideas about the car cultures. Americans are making all sorts of kind of cars and trying to build them more safer and better for the people driving them. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+41a34afe6a55,0D220BA8BA23,The Facial Action Coding System is a new descoverage of the scientifics. This new descoverage can help in some situation. It can help in many situations with the acception of the person. Fothermore it could be and not helpfull used in school ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+efac90557517,0D220BA8BA23,"FACS can be used in school for knowladge. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+dcf01e7f34b7,0D220BA8BA23,"In school can be used for give a lesson,because it will give examples of muscles on your face, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8ef413ee3f02,0D220BA8BA23,for example on of them can be orbiculris. It can teach the kids that good to show they emotions and how they show them and how they muscles act when they do them. Fothermore it can show the students that they muscles not only express emotions they can make them to. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+741f06e649f1,0D220BA8BA23,Also this can help with students that have problems in they houses and they try to hide they problems ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ed2e15cd4f6,0D220BA8BA23,It can be also used for bullying to see why kids are quiet and scared. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c76406a236c,0D220BA8BA23,"This experiment it can be help in differents part of the country no only in schools, it can help for example in hospitals ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eabb0cb543d2,0D220BA8BA23,to see how the people that can't move they face or have a muscles problems can tell how they feeling ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f3897da24ecb,0D220BA8BA23,"It's always important to know how other person feel about, because if they sad or angry make them laugh so they can have a big smile in they faces.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b24924076f0,0D34A4F5331B,"In that work we gonna explain, give ideas and talk a little bit about the problems at the study of Venus because that planet is very dangers to survival ",Position,Adequate,,,
+adde127a436e,0D34A4F5331B,"Though Venus is a ""sister"" of the Earth Planet is not the same, Venus is not safetly to people live in their ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cf0830530a1,0D34A4F5331B,"because doesn't have the sufficient oxygen to survival. Thoughthe austronomers are fascined with Venus because is the most similar planet to the Earth. But this planet obviusly have a differents to Earth like, the surface on Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees that is crazy and impossible to survival and in venus are present Volcanos eruptions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a688cdcf413,0D34A4F5331B,"A idea for the NASA from me to send people to study the planet, is implement a new jetplane more security for thr austronomers for they can survival and can study the planet. And a new uniform most special for the can have the capacity to survival that dangers problems at Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d999c6b13523,0D34A4F5331B,With that work we can explain and understand better about the problems with that planet and have ideas to a better study. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+24a9efd1355d,0D359BCEE452,By the author of this topic is really persauding by true facts where it makes u think. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+68f96e9f4780,0D359BCEE452,During all this time all the best and expert sciencetist are working together to test a method nd see if we can live on that planet without dying or not producing food or water or even shelter. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+16b684a34bd9,0D359BCEE452,"While testing we figured out that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de25de69a05a,0D359BCEE452,So that is why I think during the proccess on living venus or in the future testing methods if we could live pn venus or see if we can grow crops or bring like equiment to test samples on we can evole on this planet near us. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c6a4f7795d66,0D359BCEE452,"Even the thought of going to a new planet is a big turn of events because we dont know how its atmosphere works or gravity or air/oxygen or weather climate change or anything but we are learning about it really fast where we have to make a high expert group of people to risk their lives to see if we can produce our species or our tech,food,citys, or even animal life ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fec42e4977a1,0D359BCEE452,"in conculsion to make sure that we sure we dont make the smallest mistake to screw up the plans for us to live or visit venus in future but in mean time we have people training to become the best of the best for this secret peoject if it happens. So that is all i gotta say and i hope it does happen to make history on the board for people to live on a new generation. So our main goal is all about Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Even NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0965b6fcca6f,0D3AA8470CC4,limting use of aoto-mobiles can help change the envierment ,Position,Adequate,,,
+059fe79384a4,0D3AA8470CC4,just simply slow down the use of them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6dc198c1188b,0D3AA8470CC4,simply make green cars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3a4e205bce4,0D3AA8470CC4,"which has great gass mileage and keeps the enviorment clean. Now some people are atill going to drive there big gas sputering cars around but only a few percent of people change how long you drive or what you drive it can really make a differnce on the world to day you could possiable be saving the next generation
+
+So to all those who agree with me buy a green car or stick with your but drive less often there are other ways to get around without use of a car or motercycle there are bicycles roller scates scooters just to name a few and they also help you get in shape. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef1dc4d83f56,0D3AA8470CC4,If you dont agree with me then why are you still reading go hop on your envirment killing machiens and ruin our lovely home called earth. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3043c3d4bb98,0D45F6F0E185,"First of all, I feel like it's pretty reliable, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+4d63277151ef,0D45F6F0E185,"BUT one of the parts that threw me off was when Professer Nicu Sebe said that shes ""83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d4ffcca06f04,0D45F6F0E185,"Professer Nibu said the process begins when the computer construts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit. Then his friend Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of FAC (Facial Action Coding). Dr Huang then observed that ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e12660b040d3,0D45F6F0E185,"By using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks the facial movements in either or real face or painted picture of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions, each expression is compared against a neutral face. In fact, Dr. Huang said that we humans perform the same impressive calculation everyday, like for instance, me going to one of my close friends and seeing them frowning I will assume that they're upset about something. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+511e2758dc5a,0D45F6F0E185,"According to the machine if you frown at it, the next ad will be different. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+80edf8211362,0D45F6F0E185,"I feel like a machine like this would be very useful for computers so they can track if a student is getting distracted, tired or bored, because I feel like it could give the student a warning or something to not fall asleep during a test. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c91ae1ac4e72,0D45F6F0E185,"And lastly, no, the expirement didn't really make me happy, I tried smiling and it felt awkward. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5a06bcdc827,0D45F6F0E185,"According to the ""Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion"" moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but it may even help producethem in a way, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00248c5ce57a,0D45F6F0E185,"which was very shocking to me because I never knew anything could work like that. Reading this article made me feel smarter in a way, learning something I've never heard or seen before ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5da15662bc30,0D45F6F0E185,But in conclusion I feel as if this article is helpful and should be seen to my peers. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a565db498e4f,0D6F9BEBACE4,"They caluclate Mona Lisa emotional they said that she has 83 percent of happyness, 9 percent of disgusted, 6 percent of fearful and 2 percent angry. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles then Dr. Hung relies on the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman creator of FACS ( facial action coding system).
+
+For example your frontails parslterails muscle ( above your eye) raises your eyebrows when you're suprised; your orbicularis oris ( around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. In a classroom computer could recognize when student is becoming confused or bored at the same time technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.
+
+When feeling down look in the mirror and do these falling steps 1. rasie your lips at the corners of your mouth. 2. then squit your eyes slightly to prduce wrinkling ( crow's feet) at the corners of your eyes. 3. holding that rasie the outer parts of your cheeks up toward your eyes that you smiling as a reowned drama coach constantin stanislvsky had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emtions on stage and watching your loves one die will make you cry its the same way watching a movie of someone dieing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+652c5cf012cc,0D7FAACC389B,I feel like that the use of the emotional expressions of students in a class room is not good. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f2257406b14c,0D7FAACC389B,First of all it is not 100% offical ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+700e99e89ff6,0D7FAACC389B,Second of all it could fill you computer with viruses. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f294c4e5b7e,0D7FAACC389B,"last one is that it could be a lot of money to get in and most likly to fix it. It is a lot of work getting one of those and the thing is why buy it or even consider it, if it is not offical. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+90deb85bcf3f,0D7FAACC389B,The facial action coding system is not totaly offical. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0f3ad1c8d4c4,0D7FAACC389B,"In the story it says that it uses you face to tell what going on or something. They say that they can tell if it is a real smile or a fake one by your muscules. The muscles called orbicularis make croe's feet around your eyes, but then a fake smile, the mouth is streched sidesways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle called the risorius. Then is said that if an ad pops up and you are happy then the facial action coding system is going to think you like it then more and more are going to be poping up. Sense it said that it can tell eveything just by four face. The rusults won't be right. For people that wear makeup the facial action coding system is not going to get the right results. You might have a facial problem or something wrong with you muscles. That you wouldn'd be able to simle perfectly. Then it will give you wrong results ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f783dfa9868,0D7FAACC389B,The fact that facial action coding system is basiclly thinking and telling you how to feel it doesn't really know what you really feel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1813fe468ae8,0D7FAACC389B,"I feel like sense the camera is always going to just be watching you to see what you are feeling that is creepy. Like it said it if thinks your happy when an ad pops up it's going to pull up more and more ads and you might even get a virus. It is going to end up making some damages to your computer. Most likely people are not going to feel safe. What if someone gets to hack you computer. They are going to be watching you all day, everyday. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+951ec2c22e4c,0D7FAACC389B,Sense it said that it will cost a lot of money to get it. I won't be fair if some schools have it and if some don't. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee4f8da8e1fe,0D7FAACC389B,"The facial action coding system will be hard to get. Some school can just get enough for the basic's. If they can't even get enought to get one what if is stops working or something goes wrong. The people are going to have to find more moeny just ot fix it. Most likely, they are going to have to stop doing some clubs or some after school activities thing like that. Just to try to afford the moeny to fix the program. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c213c5ec564,0D89C8189022,Computers can do many things for us. The idea that a computer can read your emotions is amazing ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8cb9d52e5dd6,0D89C8189022,I do not belive it is true. I will believe it when I see it. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+92d390222e7b,0D89C8189022,"In paragraph 8 it says "" But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways ising the zygomatic major and different muscle, the risorius."" however this may be true for most people; there has to be someone out there in our world of 7 billion that smiles there smiles with their zygomatic muscle or their risorius muscle ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cf5c25d26c7,0D89C8189022,Everyone has diffrent emotions and everyone shows them diffrently ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+750d9f876e06,0D89C8189022,The muscles in our face does say a lot about the emotions we are feeling. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d416222c15dc,0D89C8189022,"I do belive to understand ones emotions it has to be very clear someone is sad, with tears, or you know the person well, In paragraph 5 the artical states "" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe3cad0ebbb4,0D89C8189022,"In paragraph 3 it brings up ""Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprised, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12c7bd242708,0D89C8189022,but there are way more than 6 emotions that can be reconized ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0b67c3f7664,0D89C8189022,This is why I believe computures can not read your emotions ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+edffcb0abddb,0D91BAF9E8F6,"Luke wanted to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A cattle boat came up and gave him the opportunity to be in the Seagoing Cowboy program. Luke's friend inited him to go on the cattle boat because his friend knew he wanted to be on one. Luke's life changed right after graduation.
+
+Luke did not know his life would change soon. It was 1945, World War ll was over in Europe, and many counties were left in the ruins. UNRRA hired "" Seagoing Cowboys"" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that wereshipped over seas. It says that Luke and Don signed up.
+
+He crossed the Antlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War ll. Luke also found time on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.
+
+Luke said "" It made more aware of people of other countries and their needs."" Then awareness stayed with him. The cowboys played beseball and volleyball games on board when Luke was on. There was plenty of games they played on board.
+
+Helping at his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared him is what the paragrph said so what it is saying is when he was little then he went to his aunt Katie's farm and played around and it helped him with his future with animals.        ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df4050e115ac,0D91FC8A9FE7,"For students, summer projects can feel like a lot, summer break is supposed to be filled with fun times and vacations while projects are almost the exact opposite. Removing summer projects all together isnt an option, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e6be044be148,0D91FC8A9FE7,"so when it comes to the question ""should summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed"" teacher-designed projects reign supreme, as it benefits both the student and the teacher in multiple different ways. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+a7388b24b94f,0D91FC8A9FE7,"As a teacher, your main job is proving students with a learning experience that will help them grow as people. Having a student design a summer project would not be nearly as powerful as the impact a teacher-designed project would. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+172974386dd1,0D91FC8A9FE7,"Teachers are well informed and know a lot more than most students and because of this it is their responsibility to provide a student with a project rather then have them create one themselves. This is especially reinforced in younger children, such as grades k-6, as they still need a lot of direction and having a student-designed project would not be as viable or coherent as a teacher-designed project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e689c66b257,0D91FC8A9FE7,"Teachers have it difficult sometimes, as they are trying their best to provide students with a learning experience, but teachers also deserve to have their job be a little easier ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efee4263f461,0D91FC8A9FE7,"Creating a teacher-designed project as opposed to a student-designed one, would be far easier to grade and create a rubric for ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f0ab4586af84,0D91FC8A9FE7,". In student-designed projects you have a lot of variety and no one follows a central guideline, however in a teacher-designed project, you can maintain the variety but also contain a set of rules that benefits both the students and teachers, as the students have more clearly defined rules to guide and provide structure to their projects. This also benefits the teachers, as they can easily grade the assignment and provide a fair grading experience. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+df0681b1771f,0D91FC8A9FE7,"Finally, teachers have everyone's best interest at heart when designing projects. Teachers will always design something challenging and beneficial to the students education. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dd27b9c0336b,0D91FC8A9FE7,"Students, especially younger ones, cannot be trusted to design a project that would be as beneficial as a teacher-designed project. Students often take shortcuts or the easy way out and while sometimes this can be beneficial to the students and their education, it is more often harmful then doing it the right way and teaches them to be lazy. A teacher-designed project on the other hand, would be designed with the thoughts of providing an enriching experience to the student and hopefully making them a more successful and educated person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec0a648bf7c6,0D91FC8A9FE7,"Teachers play well informed, and important roles in a students life while they develop, and education is a very big part of student development so, projects should be designed with a teachers interests at heart. Because of that, when it comes down to it, teacher-designed projects are generally more helpful, easier, and responsible then a student-designed project would be. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c011fa1feaf7,0DB48DDD9022,"I feel like I am for the value of this use of technology, because you can calculate other peoples facial emotions and your facial movements. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8e6ac3f9c82b,0DB48DDD9022,I feel like if you can calculate emotions on a persons face you could understand that person better and what there feeling. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec07e6ffe34e,0DB48DDD9022,"You could do a 3-D model of the face and put in all of the muscles just like a human has on their face.
+
+You could understand if their happy, suprised, or even sad. Your frontalis pars lateralis muscles ( above the eyes ) raises your eyebrows when your suprised or scared.
+
+Your emotions could be all over the place.
+
+You could have certian facial expressions.
+
+For an example, you could have your fear look. You could've saw something that you're afraid of and have a fear look. The software could even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.
+
+I know that everyone has different facial features, but some people have the same facial expressions.
+
+I personally think that we should all have different facial features because no one can be the same and no one is perfect. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d8a026f5b45,0DB48DDD9022,"This technology could observe how our face is formed in the future. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b8fc136de6aa,0DB48DDD9022,"This new technologyis the same technology for making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or surgery. "" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication "" that Dr. Huang had. Computured need to understand that, too "" said Dr. Huang.
+
+Your personal computer can't handle the complex of the algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0662a80017a8,0DB48DDD9022,"You sometimes has to ask yourself
+
+"" Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?"" and "" Can your lab partner recognize which one? "" So I think that this technology is a good idea.        ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f473bc4b6068,0DC3BDC76434,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit even with the dangers on the planet. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d9e071f47769,0DC3BDC76434,"Venus is the sister planet to Earth but the surface of Venus presents a challange to any living thing. Venus is also called the ""Evening Star"" despite it being a planet.
+
+Venus is a planet that the most like Earth but we bearly studied it because we'll have to get on the planet to do so. Venus has around the same density and size as the Earth but Venus' surface is 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus' Atmosphere is dangrous as well with 97% of it being carbon dioxide and the clouds made out of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Many people may be wondering "" If our sister planet is so in hospitable, why are scientists even thinking about any further visits? Astronomers are really fascinated by our sister planet because how close to Earth it really is, Venus even has valleys, mountains, and craters just like our Earth.
+
+For future visits NASA has came up with an idea to has hover crafth that floats 30 or so miles so we wouldn't have to step on the boiling planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5939f4967636,0DC3BDC76434,Venus is a worthy pursuit because the more we know about our sister planet the more things we get to do with it. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6c66de01c4d3,0DDCAFAEA487,In the article it talks about a facon mars that has appeared on Viking 1 while looking for a place to land. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f9f421835316,0DDCAFAEA487,The face is a natral land form ,Position,Adequate,,,
+76b01afb2bd0,0DDCAFAEA487,"because thats like saying our land forms were made by aliens and thats why we have mountains, valleys, and plains. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65d21b9d4f96,0DDCAFAEA487,"In the article it says ""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural land form. There was no alien monument after all."". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0b227b18b4e,0DDCAFAEA487,"The article also states about the face on mars""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82a9c8075fde,0DDCAFAEA487,"Another quote that proves this is a land form is ""Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the Face on mars.""The photo of mars is a land form because it says right there in the passage it is a lava dome and it is about the same hieght as the face on mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9efad0507ecf,0DDCAFAEA487,"In paragraph 6 it says ""although few scientists belived the face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia bacame a priority fo NASA whe Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1bccace3f49f,0DEDD9E3222F,"In this essay, I'm going to talk about the new softare, that is called the Facial Action Coding system, which can help the computer to knows if we are sad, happy or angry. Putting the example of the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's called Mona lisa. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7a7de1996f13,0DEDD9E3222F,"this software is a very good idea, for the teachers and the students too. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fa1e707f2eb9,0DEDD9E3222F,"The software can calculate ""emotions"" like math homework. Just recognizing the subtle facial movemets that persons use to express how they feel. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adb6388f044f,0DEDD9E3222F,"The new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application for a variety of industries ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+452001bee6fd,0DEDD9E3222F,"It's a new software that can recognize emotion, and it's the last innovation from prof. Thomas Huang and his colleague Are experts that are trying to do better ways for human an computers to communicate. This process begins when the computer does a 3-D model of the face; creating at least of 44 major muscles making it move like human muscles. Eckman has classifies six emotions ( happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and saddnes) Associating each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example: your muscles above your eyes rais your eyebrowns when you are surprised. The software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b81bcd8815a2,0DEDD9E3222F,"A big example is The subject of Leonardo da Vinci's, Mona lisa. Da vinci studied anatomy to thelp them paint facial muscles for paint special emotions ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9353d4a72337,0DEDD9E3222F,"This subject is really intented to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how this can computer can do. Your PC can't handle the use to decode Mona lisa smile. But this invent can write down simple instructions that ""encode"" differet emotions. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+efdcd98a5652,0DEDD9E3222F,"This software makes the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused, then it could modify the lessons, like an human ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+705fc0d85749,0DEDD9E3222F,"It can indicate the difference between a genuinie smile and a forced one. To finish with some cientifics conclusions and understand better your boddy. According to the Facial
+
+Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not ont only express emotions, but also may help produce them. A example is when a drama coach tells to his actor carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage because empath might happen when you see someone else expressions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95f0b7da38ab,0DEDD9E3222F,"In conclusion a think this is a good idea, because you can problably know when a friend is feeling just looking on his face, so imagic that a software in your computer can know that ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2cdb5b6334a1,0E185FDC7CCE,"May 19,1950 9:30 A.M.
+
+""Wow, I Just had a dreamed about when I started to become a seagoing cowboy, man those were the doy days."" ""Well time for breakfast"" I said. Then Like went downstairs and ate some bread. Then I went outside and went to the store and buy some food. Then he went to his family's house to talk to some of the visitors.
+
+May 20, 1950 11:00 A.M.
+
+the next day I got up and did the some the same thing as yesterday but today was a bit different because today My friend Don was trying to find me. Don was able to find me at the ice shop and said that we need to go the Seagoing cowboys program today to teach any of the people who has signed up.
+
+1:34 P.M.
+
+When got there, the place when they held the program was different becaue no one was there. Then we was a sign that said"" ANY EXPERIENCED SEAGOING BOYBOYS COME IN."" ""Ok then"" said Don. Then we When inside there were some old Seagoing Cowboy I remenber.
+
+1:40 P.M. 1950
+
+Then an old man got up and said, "" Thank you you all for coming, I am her to tell you than we need your help."" ""What kind of help?"" asked some Seagoing Cowboy. Well we need you all to go on a little trip back to Europe to help some People out over there becuase some the Students over there needs some adive about some of the jobs you did back in 1945. ""Ok, sure thing"" said most of the Seagoing cowboys. but some of the rest asked 'what, why??"" Well the ship leaves the next day so pack some of your things you well need.
+
+May 21, 1950 Noon
+
+Don and I got on the Ship and into a bunk room. ""Well just like old times"" said Don
+
+""yup"" I said back. ""Well I am going to explore the ship do you come?"" I asked. ""How about we unpack out things."" Don said ""Ok"" I said.
+
+June 2, 1950 9:00
+
+""there is a thunder storm out side I wonder if lighing is going to hit the ship?"" I asked. The odds of that .. BOOOM!!! Then the alarm came one and said everyone to get to the life boats. Don and I tried to pack our thing but we only pack hlaf of our things and that fell over board while we got in to the life boats.
+
+June ? 1950 ?:??
+
+Don and I woke up one the beach of a nearby city with a few Seagoing Cowboys. ""Where are we??"" asked Don ""I don't know"" I said.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b268a5cdbe72,0E424AAB5B39,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2a0276ca69cb,0E424AAB5B39,"because In the text it states that venus is actually a planet and venus is the second planet from the sun. The text also states that venus is simple to see from a far distant. Finally, it says that numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study in etc. If you look back in paragraph 1& 2 that's where I got all the information from to support my answer. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+916d7ff46b41,0E424AAB5B39,"In conclusion studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because if you just reread everything in this passage it's basically telling you alot of information about venus. If you look back in the passage in read paragraph 8 it's giving you information about venus it says that venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The last in final thing is that our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. So that basically tells you everything about why studying is a worthy pursuit despite for venus. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+77e0ed938496,0E49EB72AAA4,"There are many dangers that come along with studying planets. Along with the dangers, there are also countless benefits to learning more about different planets. In the passage, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author addresses the point that Venus is worth taking a closer look at and focusing on, no matter the dangers it could put one in. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b00f58b5d941,0E49EB72AAA4,"Although many people believe that the author doesn't support this idea well, the author provides researched evidence and past experiences all throughout the passage to support this idea. ",Position,Effective,,,
+e24a1a6ee50f,0E49EB72AAA4,"In, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author includes well researched evidence to support the idea that Venus is worthy of studying further. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cd53d75a9e7,0E49EB72AAA4,"When explaining NASA's ideas on sending humans to Venus, the author states, ""NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."" This provides evidence that shows what a solution is to avoiding some of the difficulties that occur when trying to explore Venus. The author was able to support his idea throught the use of NASA and it's research. The passage continues to come up with a plan on the best way to float above Venus when the author says, ""At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth."" This factual evidence that is included ensures that the author is supporting this idea to the fullest of his potential. Researched and factual evidence that is provided all throughout the passage shows how the author supports this idea thoroughly and well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7b369889decf,0E49EB72AAA4,The also supports his idea of studying Venus depsite the dangers because he includes past experiences that make this idea stronger. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b526ae19cda4,0E49EB72AAA4,"When explaining past explorations to Venus, the author states, ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" Facts that have been presented that occured in the past help the author support his idea that there is reasons why people should look into further studying Venus. These past facts present the idea that Venus once looked like Earth did, and if that is true, there are reasons why it should be looked into further. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+330b457f1916,0E49EB72AAA4,"The passage later explains examples of NASA's approached to studying Venus when the author says, ""Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II."" The idea of looking back on past resources to help the studying of Venus would help the process. This past project is a key tool that helps support that Venus should be studied even though it can be extremely dangerous. Using past experiences such as the ones included helps support and grow the authors idea. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3896374f1a2d,0E49EB72AAA4,"Ultimatley, it is understandable why one would believe that it isn't smart to look into studying and experimenting with Venus; however, the examples of the researched facts and past experiences help to support the authors idea that despite the dangers, Venus is worthy of studying. There may be many dangers that come along with studying different planets, but based off the evidence the author provided, Venus has avoidable ways to make it safe to study. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2eb1f2826dba,0E5BCFB10650,"As the end of a school year comes to a close, the summer is just beginning. Many during summer use it as a time to have fun and take a break from school. Some schools though require students to complete a summer project to ensure learning continues throughout the year. This can help to make sure that the student mind is awake and ready to learn when the start of the new school year begins. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+794f175c3677,0E5BCFB10650,The basis for summer projects to assure continuous learning should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+804f6ad93bea,0E5BCFB10650,creative projects would be produced ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7b41031e96e8,0E5BCFB10650,"it would give students an opportunity to take control of their education. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+703751d0fe85,0E5BCFB10650,"During the school year, students go from class to class completing the required work to excel. In most cases, this requires sitting through a lecture followed by an activity and homework. All of which are teacher-designed. For this reason, summer projects should be student-designed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9b9ef30ef18,0E5BCFB10650,Student-designed projects would give students the opportunity to take control of their education ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4c826de5c946,0E5BCFB10650,"Students would learn the responsibility of completing a project without a teacher telling them the process they should follow. The students would have to research and create a project based on something that they are passionate about. For example, every student has their own interest such as baking, rocketry, and architecture. With student-designed summer projects, each student can complete their own individualized project based on their own interests. As to where a teacher-designed project the student has to go with what the teacher assigns. If the teacher is interested in types of frogs, students would have to complete a project based on the interest of the teacher. Student-designed summer projects would give students the opportunity to take control of their education. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6f003225b4d6,0E5BCFB10650,"When a teacher assigns a project, there are strict guidelines on how the project should be completed. To combat the harsh guidelines, a student-designed project would create more creative projects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+58c5fd29394a,0E5BCFB10650,"For example, if there are 20 students in a class with one teacher and the teacher assigns a project, there will be 20 of the same project that return because of the guidelines that the teacher established when creating the project. But if every one of the 20 students got to design their own project, there will be 20 different projects that come back to be presented. This will happen because the students will feel more personally connected to their project. Students won't feel as if it is a project the teachers gave them but rather something fun to do over the summer. Having a summer project that is designed by an individual, the teacher, for a group, the students, will create a detriment to creativity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d5d750663ce,0E5BCFB10650,"Some may argue that if summer projects were teacher-designed, then the teachers could regulate and prepare the students better for the upcoming school year. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+93876054001,0E5BCFB10650,"This may be true, but considering that throughout the normal school year teachers design and assign work to students, it would be more beneficial to give students the opportunity to learn how to take charge of their own work. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6d4f2c45fbbb,0E5BCFB10650,Continuing to have teachers dictate the types of projects students complete year round will not prepare them for the world. A student-designed project would prepare students better for the world. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eebd97587f37,0E5BCFB10650,"Once the students enter the world, there won't always be a teacher telling them how to complete the task assigned to them. Giving students the opportunity to experience independence over the summer is a perfect way to prepare them for the world. Preparing students for the world out of school is more important than preparing them for a few weeks in the future when school starts. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d5a1e29d74cc,0E5BCFB10650,"Schools that require students to complete a summer project should make the projects student-designed. Student-designed projects would cause for more creative projects compared to teacher-designed projects, and it would give students the opportunity to take charge of their education. Having summer projects to insure students continuous learning is a terrific way to enhance a students education. But done incorrectly, it can cause a student to dread school more. A well executed summer project would be student-designed, where the student gets to decide on their own project based on an interest of their liking. Making sure that students are positively active in their education is crucial to developing a well rounded individual. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9821e52919d4,0E67436136BE,intro: Today ill be telling you the pros and cons about having this technology in our schools from counslers being able to tell whats with the student to invading the privacy of what we humans have to preventng suicide and to be able to maybe stop someone from commiting suicide or knowing someone is going through depression. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+925d6539bda7,0E67436136BE,body: so me personally think this would be some great technology to have in our schools ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cb3f67486973,0E67436136BE,espically for consoulers so say someone is really sad and depressed but they are to scared to open up about how they feel or whats going so you put the computer on there face and it shows they are depressed sad and scared well now you know how your student is feeling ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+15eb2902e184,0E67436136BE,so then you cheer them up and work to make things better you dont know it but you just saved a life because who knows weather or not that student was about to comit suicide or say someone was threatned and they will not tell you that so they act like there fine but you put the computer on them and it shows that they are scared now you know they are scared and can try to work with them to open up ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+302b5d8ce097,0E67436136BE,but from other people perspectives i can totally see how this is a total invading of privacy because we all have secrects and we dont want people knowing if were depressed or sad and alot of people dont like to communicate or open with anyone and also what if things get passed around about you being depressed the generatin today are bullys so i can see someone making fun of someone for being depressed. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7a349a0b9135,0E67436136BE,"conclusion: inconclusion i think it would be some great technology to have in our schools just think about how many lives we can change or how many lives we can save by just knowing how the person next to you is feeling it would save a lot of time trying to get the person to tell you whats wrong when you can just take a picture of there face so yes i do think it would be great because itll make life better, you would save more time, and you could change alot of lives and save alot of lives with this type of technology. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a7a3335f4ed2,0E6BB199BF93,it is good to say that they must sign up in a activity in sports or yearbooks. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc44b6350c89,0E6BB199BF93,So they can move around and exersice. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c85e9dd7df0,0E6BB199BF93,"Sports is a good activity to sign up for because in sports you can sign up for football soccer,baseball,Track ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ade173bb00d1,0E6BB199BF93,All of these activities are great to sign up for even if. You dont have to sign up for these you can sign up for the yearbooks. The year books are great ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f01e2b114700,0E6BB199BF93,because if more people sign up for the yearbooks the pictures can be done faster. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+22bde93265a8,0E6BB199BF93,"Sports could be a awsome! activity to sign up for because if your in soccer you can go to soccer practices more then 2 times a week. The games can be at least 1 hour and more and you can celebrate when you win a game. Games dont happen offten a week but practicing can be good for you! because you get to run and do laps when your coach tells you to. During games there can be drinks that you can have there is mostly water so that can heal you up and get your energy back.
+
+The activities can be thery relaxing and a really good sport to join like if you like to run and exersise just join wich ever sport. The best one is most likely track because in track you can run alot. Football can be hard at most of the time you can go against tall poeple and really strong people the way how you can be like them is just train more and exersise more. If you do that then you will be able to join a higher team with better players in football. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a3fc551a64f,0E6BB199BF93,during football games the players can be really loud and anoying and tease you wich can be bad and get people mad that has happened alot during football history. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a321bbc9f47c,0E6BB199BF93,"during yearbooks if your teaacher tells you, you can get out for class and go to different classes and take pictures in there classroom and post them in the yearbook. Also you can take a camera with you and take some cool pictures there. The yearbooks can be awsome because you can take pictures of fun and funny stuff in a classroom.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+294a00ec8ee9,0EC4EF416F2F,the advantages of limiting car usage are very rare ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+09c6533bdd95,0EC4EF416F2F,"some people own cars some dont some take bus but some work so they can own there own car. there has been a large drop in the percentage 16-to 39 year olds getting there license and other people who already have there license are renewing them, kids get jobs so that when there more older there able to get there own car without asking there parents to take them places . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+67c59a28c743,0EC4EF416F2F,"car ownership is allowed but there are only two places to park large garages at the edge of the development where a car owner buys a spance for the amount of 40,000 with the home ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86072183ff66,0EC4EF416F2F,"passenger cars are respinsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent in some car intensive ares in the united states in the new approach stores are placed a walk way on a main street rather than in malls along some distant high way. almost 4,000 drivers wee fined. 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d467a2ecc33,0ED28D8A5EC4,"The author talks about the challenge of exploring venis, he talks about how astronomers are interested in venis because it may once have be the most earth like planet in our solar system. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d9490f47c903,0ED28D8A5EC4,"The fact that there is a possiblity of there once being life on that planets surface, that is amazing. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+50e8224ef0da,0ED28D8A5EC4,The facts abouts about venis and how the author shows that it can be dangerous to be on venis. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdcca4bcc7e3,0ED28D8A5EC4,"The first fact, the atmosphere of venis is 97 percent carbon dixide. If there was life on venis at once, then the life like creatures didn't last long. The planet venis could be the twin of earth. On the suface of venis it is about 800 degrees fahrenhiet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1943d4f55eb,0ED28D8A5EC4,"The chance of there being life on venis, there is about 50/50 chance of there once was life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+29a0d16b416a,0ED28D8A5EC4,"the fact is that the pressure of the planet being 90. that could crush any lind of living thing. There can't be a creature that live on a surface that is hot. The pressure of the planets atmosphere is 90, humans can be crushed easily. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30813910e7a9,0ED28D8A5EC4,The distantce from venis to our earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02c606b83fe8,0ED28D8A5EC4,the planet venis is rearly near our earth. it is in the orbit in our solar system so yes it is close by to the earth. Just about anything in the salor system of our is close to us. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f5e853c0b8ff,0ED28D8A5EC4,"The author is right, the dangers of life on venis is very risky. It can crush anything with the pressure. It could kill anything that goes past its atmosphere. the athor despites the risk and the way venis is. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a49362b6aa9f,0ED86BD7C2F0,"After Luke Bomberger graduation, he had two jobs he worked ar a grocery store and a bank. so when his friend ask him to go to europe on a cattle boat. in the passage luke said that he could not say no. It also includes that it was an opportuity of a lifetime.
+
+In the passage i said that unrra hired ""Seagoing Cowboys'' to take care of horeses, young cows, and mules that were shiped overseas. and Luke and Don sighned up. I think luke sighned up because he was helping out on his aunt farm. So he knew alot about helping with animals. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+438817e9a395,0ED86BD7C2F0,I think that Luke and Don had a good reason to join that program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+69716a55e169,0EEE131E57EC,"I am Jacob Bomberger. I am a sea going cowboy and I have crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times, and the pacific 2 times. Being a sea cowboy is a great way to serve people in war. I have been to many places, I have been seeing sites and serveing countries for a long time. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+47091c9daa77,0EEE131E57EC,"My friend Don Reist invited me on a trip to Europe on a cattle boat in 1945, and that is when it all began. You should participate in the sea cowboys program because it is a great way to see sites, go traveling and make new friends. I have been to many different countries like Europe, Greece, China, Italy, and Crete! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a13f3afb8b9,0EEE131E57EC,"You could see these sites too if you join the sea cowboys program too. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9727a1f800ad,0EEE131E57EC,It is also a very good way to make friends to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2262cff51f33,0EEE131E57EC,I have made friends with the people on the boats with me and the people i meet in different countries. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0a289259056,0EEE131E57EC,"Taking care of the animals was a great way for me to pass the time and helping my aunt Katie's farm made it alot easier. We arrived in Europe right after the pacific war. After Europe we packed our animals and headed up to Greece. I turned 18 before reaching greece so i was old enough to get drafted into the millitary, But they told me that i should just keep doing what im doing. The sea cowboys program is a great way to do millitary service to. . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0143dfa477b0,0EEE131E57EC,"Being a sea cowboy is more than an adventure, It helped me see the world and know exactly what is going on in other contries ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9b6f909d1192,0EEE131E57EC,I think you should join the sea cowboy program because it would be a learning experience for all. The sea cowboy programis a life changing expirence that i think you would enjoy! ,Position,Effective,,,
+242111e89e22,0F0059FAAF36,Swish swash the boat tips back and forth as we head forward. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3cc83c93439b,0F0059FAAF36,"LOVE animals, water, or everything become a Seagoing Cowboy. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+10bb0639c247,0F0059FAAF36,"This will help you freshen up. You will be able to see fish, seagles, whales, dolphins, and much more. You will see many other people and you can comepeat in baceball, volleyball, table- tennis, fencing, and evan boxing. Not realy the sportsey kind of person thats fine you can read, write, whisle, and play other games. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f46af20a2160,0F0059FAAF36,Bang chrash heho the animals may make a lot of noise but ......... their sooooooooo cute. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7369bd5e61b4,0F0059FAAF36,"You feed the houres, the ponyes, and many more animals. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c52a3ad95bf,0F0059FAAF36,''I always say life is not always about what you feel the world consist of others or dose Albert Eistine say that I can not reamember anymore'' ''I know life is not seved to you on a silver plater you have to work for it BUUUT for a hourse it is toutilyey not fair I mean why do they get it all and we have to give it to them. SOOOO sorry I got of tipice waaaaaayyyyyy off topic.'' ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90eac4871ddd,0F0059FAAF36,So as I was saying the needs of others come first not your own when your a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a8b6267eb78,0F0059FAAF36,It is all around you it is blue it is wet what is it...? it is water. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c68c55c72ec,0F0059FAAF36,"a The water dose not come from a skink it comes from omm Well i do not know where it comes from. You can feel that ocen brease going throurth your hair. That solty air filling your lunges it is exstrodinary. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8062c6b1f00f,0F0059FAAF36,Mony mony who dose not LOOOOVE mony. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7b1d4ce6501,0F0059FAAF36,The joney back is allll free time you can do what evver you want. So you get paid for doing nothing cool right. will at least I do. become a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8dcb164f4e76,0F0059FAAF36,You might say I have to clean up poop gross. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+67993539cfb3,0F0059FAAF36,Well you are right sorry but it is worth it. I get sea sick. Then sty in the bottom of the ship. Idon't like fish. aThen do not look at them ovily. I have probles or isuse. Then stop with alllll the complaining. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+094dad2b5afb,0F0059FAAF36,Become a SEAGOING COWBOY now, you will not ever for get it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,
+de5ee9634031,0F10DC1AE015,"Across the nation, nearly 98% of schools have offered extracurricular activities for their students, but less than half of that 98% have mandated participating in one. In many schools worldwide, extracurriculars have been known to both help and hurt students - they can lead to staying up late making up for lost time, or they can lead to winning awards and even scholarships. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+39aee3524bc4,0F10DC1AE015,I believe that all students should be required to participate in extracurricular activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec3cb26ba093,0F10DC1AE015,mandating that students participate in after school activities could improve kids' work ethic. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+af984b22641a,0F10DC1AE015,"a study titled ""Extracurriculars and Students"" by Professor James Wood at UVA proves this. Wood found that 65% of students who participated in extracurriculars said they enjoyed the additional challenges that were presented to them, and actually continued to work harder and challenge themselves not only in their education, but also in the workforce. This means that teens and kids who entered after school clubs and sports teams worked harder and were able to learn how to overcome obstacles and challenges. This also goes to show how students that entered extracurricular activities did indeed improve their work ethic. In general, I think you'l find that this is important because it shows how adolescents were able to benefit from after school activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0acaccee9bc3,0F10DC1AE015,requiring students to join extracurricular activities could help students get into better colleges. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4a61b22e8888,0F10DC1AE015,"a statement released by Harvard University said that 80% of colleges look for (and accept) students who participated in one or more extracurricular activities. To put it simply, after school activities have been known to assist students in getting into better schools. This relates because it shows how kids and teens who entered after school activities could manage getting into excellent colleges and create a better future for themselves. This matters due to how it shows that extracurriculars can broaden the horizon for students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22be38aa2b5d,0F10DC1AE015,It's actually been shown that clubs and teams could improve a students' health. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ef788cbd50a8,0F10DC1AE015,"A professional from Johns Hopkins said in an interview, ""...Students who participated in activities after school were reported to have a better attitude, more motivation in and outside of school, and possessed an overall healthier lifestyle than their peers who did not join any extracurriculars."" In other words, adolescents who joined activities after school tended to be in better condition than those who decided not to participate in any clubs or join any sports teams. This displays how students have been able to thrive and even better themselves thanks to extracurriculars. Overall, I think you'll find this important because it shows how kids and teens can greatly benefit from after school activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+78f30ab7c08c,0F10DC1AE015,"some might argue that students should not be mandated to take part in extracurricular activities, and say that teens may already have a ""full plate"" and thus become stressed ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b13b8d1c4c1f,0F10DC1AE015,"A statistic from the Teens and Mental Health Welfare Society revealed that 48% of students who participated in after school activities reported an increase in stress levels. To put it differently, close to half of the kids they talked to felt stressed due to their extracurriculars. This also demonstrates how a few students are actually pressured by their after school activities. Ultimately, extracurricular activities may stress students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f1b23528219,0F10DC1AE015,"While that might be true, there's no denying that after school activities can also teach kids to lessen their stress by learning to budget their time ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3c75960630da,0F10DC1AE015,"In fact, I personally was able to learn how to budget my time between school, family, friends, and extracurriculars. While I did have a lot on my plate at first, my extracurriculars like sports, newspaper, and a few of my other hobbies enabled me to learn how to equally set aside time to complete all of my tasks in a timely manner, and still have time to relax. To put it in an alternate way, my after school activities were able to teach me an important skill that I'd be able to use for many years to come. You'll see that this shows that, truly, extracurriculars can teach students how to budget their time effectively. Ultimately, my extracurricular activities taught me an important life skill that could benefit me in many area of my life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+23bae6306ab5,0F10DC1AE015,"In the end, I think that we should mandate participating in extracurriculars, as it could improve kids' work ethic, assist students in getting into good colleges, and even keep them healthy. Imagine a school with no after school clubs or teams offered to students; kids would be bored, unhappy to go to school with no chance to socialize or get active, and, most importantly, no chance to broaden their horizon and truly reach their full potential. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+89554ddc22e1,0F2199921C33,"Do you remember the summer projects that you had to do during summer break? Even now as fewer places require summer projects for all class,they are still an important thing for both students and teachers. They allow both so see how the other is either by teaching style or how they did on the content. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cec88a31dcf3,0F2199921C33,The summer projects should be teacher designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c81b32b22872,0F2199921C33,it gives the teacher a chance to gauge the students academic level ,Claim,Effective,,,
+27ca36a0bda2,0F2199921C33,base it on what they will be learning that year ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9a6b9a33d90a,0F2199921C33,"and learn the learning style of students. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+614cd99fec55,0F2199921C33,Some say that student designed summer projects are better because they allow the student to pick something that they find interesting and that they understand. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a2c4308dd1bf,0F2199921C33,And while it may be good that the student is interested in the topic they are working on it sort off defeats the purpose of the project. Because the projects are suppose to be a introduction into the next year and a way for the teacher to learn about the students ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+655dee8bcbf1,0F2199921C33,"A student who is knowable able about history may design a project about Ancient Egypt,but if they already know the topic,they aren't learning anything. And while having the students create the projects may allow for more originality in the type and topic of them. That dosen't give the teacher the view of the student that they are meant to give teachers. Most students will design the project if given the chance to be easy so that they can have a good grade to start the year out. But that dosen't let the teacher see their strength and weakness,and the puts them at a disadvantage because the teacher wont know were the need help till it might be to late. If a student knows they have an English timed writing in Ms. Generic_Name class when they get into school,and they get to pic the book they analyze for it. They will pick and book probably that is on the easier side and that they understand. But if they are assigned a book by Ms. Generic_Name, she can see what skills they need when they do the writing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c1d9b65465f,0F2199921C33,Teacher-designed summer projects allow teachers to gauge students academic level on various topics. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a5d11fe804cd,0F2199921C33,"The teacher can create different problems bases on different levels of understanding to see which students get what level. This allows them a more direct view then viewing grades or passed assignments because the students may have improved since that was done. Once the teacher can see what academic level the students are on it allows them to create curriculum that allows everyone to understand and be successful during their class. If Mr. Generic_Name has a majority of people in his algebra 2 class that dont understand functions,he might spend some more time on the basics since a majority of the year will be using functions of some sort.
+
+It also allows them to see who might need extra help in a subject and who can do it by them selves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+980414e30e59,0F2199921C33,"eacher designed summer projects also allow teachers to give a glimpse into the years curriculum. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c39c887fd182,0F2199921C33,"Students can get a glimpse into the curriculum of the year from teacher designed summer projects because they can insert preassesment questions to get a handle on prior knowledge or have questions that tie ideas from the previous year into the new one. For example,Mr. Generic_Name could put in a questions about the cold war to see what people know. If a majority of the class has an understanding they can spend less time on that during the year and more on areas they are more shaky on. English and Math teachers can have problems were they have student uses old methods to solve new types of problems. This allows them to see if they need to spend more time on the basics before moving on to more advanced topics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+76957413823c,0F2199921C33,Teacher designed summer projects in addition allow teachers the ability to see the students learning style and learn them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+345f01221680,0F2199921C33,"Teachers can see the learning style of students by including different types of questions bases on different learning styles. In the projects,they design they could included questions that appeal to visual learners as well as topics that appeal to mental learners. In math and science,they can included different ways of getting to the solution to see which way the student do the best on. This allows the teacher to create assignments that cater to the students. Since every batch of students is different this allows the teacher to change their curriculum to fit the students they have this year so that they can leave successful and ready for what ever next. Not all years are going to be the same, Ms. Generic_Name might have a bunch of auditory learners one year but the next she has a bunch of tactile learners and if she designs her projects to look for that. She can plan accordingly and change her style a little so the students still leave her class successful. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e71caa5c79e,0F2199921C33,"Those are some of the reasons schools should have Teacher designed summer projects. Schools should have their summer projects be designed by teachers because it allows the teacher to gauge students understanding of principles and topics,allows introduction of new material,and learn learning styles. All schools that do summer projects should allow Teachers to designed them because that will help the year go better for both the teacher and student.          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a60f8be7b0a6,0F23D0A1E0F0,What the author was suggesting when he was saying venus is dangerous but a worthy pursuit. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5e81eae53b78,0F23D0A1E0F0,Was that no spacecraft survived more that a couple of hours on venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f36f06125781,0F23D0A1E0F0,The atmosphere was dangerous to people. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1b0b4c81942c,0F23D0A1E0F0,It has the hottest surface temperature. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1e05a80c7883,0F23D0A1E0F0,you cant go onto Venus ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2a9c2c3b8861,0F23D0A1E0F0,no spacecraft lasted more than a couple of hours on Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96ae918d179f,0F23D0A1E0F0,If a spacecraft couldn't survive on Venus there is no way that a human can survive. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9703d74c226,0F23D0A1E0F0,The second reason that man cannot be on Venus is because the atmosphere is dangerous to humans. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c28db01abb67,0F23D0A1E0F0,The atmosphere is almost 97 percent cardon dioxide. Which is deadly to humans. Its like being trapped in an small airtight box with no holes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6dfb2b5d373b,0F23D0A1E0F0,The last reason that humans can't be on Venus is because it also has the hottest surface temperature of all the planets. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9cd1c9cd3014,0F23D0A1E0F0,"While also having many active volcanoes, earthquakes and more frequent lightning strikes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9ad7d0b5e7c,0F23D0A1E0F0,"So in conclusion no human can last very long on Venus, making it interesting but hard to research do to that no spacecraft survived more that a couple of hours on Venus. The atmosphere is dangerous to people. It has the hottest surface temperature. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f21dbbb78d56,0F3F6283B13B,"Everyone seems to believe that the face on mars was created by Aliens. They say that the scientists are wrong by saying it was a natural landform. But, do they actually do research like the scientists do? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bedc8a855ff5,0F3F6283B13B,"There are many reasons that the face on mars is just a lanform, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+76fcb3cd69c7,0F3F6283B13B,"First off, when NASA's Vicking one spacecraft was just circling and roaming around it came across something unexpecting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7251ceab98cd,0F3F6283B13B,"By snapping a few pictures, they believed it was a face. Later, when it was revealed to the world, people believed that aliens had made that mark on mars. The texts says, that no one has past over that ""face"" in awhile. So how come a few pictures identify a face by using one camera? So that's when scientist decided to investigate the face on mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4277a5169d7,0F3F6283B13B,"After scientists did a little research on their own, ""The Face"" turned out to actually be a messa that is common around the american west. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+673991af8d35,0F3F6283B13B,"How can that be? Well, i will expect no one to believe that because for 25 years it was known as the face on mars. Scientists had to travel up to space by Mars and snap several pictures of the face. After they did their research collected thir data it came out to be a landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc5b31177611,0F3F6283B13B,Some say that the scientists used a digital three image camera. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+56d17c1cb672,0F3F6283B13B,What's the difference its just a camera ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+06ceda39586a,0F3F6283B13B,"Well, that camera captured the truth about mars. For proof, if you looked online you can actually see what was really there. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b49bfd0dde0d,0F3F6283B13B,"Even NASA's spacecraft revealed it to be a messa. So, it was just a false staement. There was no alien monument, in the first place. So for 25 years the face on Mars was actually a messa. But NASA would rather hide the truth about what they saw. So until, it's revealed as an actual face, it will be known as a messa or some peopel still say it's the face of Mars. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c355f2ab00f,0F3F6283B13B,"So with that all said, the face turned out to be a messa. So with the actual data, everyone should know that it is a messa. So wa sthe face really created by aliens, no it was not. It was really a landform.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d0c6f1e0db4,0FD5B95A957D,"Creativity is the heart of our current society, when given the opportunity those who have the ability to think outside the box create unimaginably beautiful things. In schools students arent given the opportunity to be as creative as they could be because of how restrictive and bland the projects and assignments made by teachers are. If our society depends on the creativity and skill set of the current generation in schools why not give them the opportunity to develop their skills and be able to flourish in their own success? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c0f0a52668fc,0FD5B95A957D,Which is why I think that summer projects should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+597ae99f06ab,0FD5B95A957D,its helps students learn to become more creative ,Claim,Effective,,,
+aa25fb827676,0FD5B95A957D,helps prepare them for the future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c9dbe84ab3ac,0FD5B95A957D,Students usually spend their summer either sleeping or just having fun with their friends trying to make the most out of the break but as students reach high schools they find that they have to do projects over the summer. Almost all students are annoyed at the fact that they have to do a summer project for a class and most of them leave it till the last second to actually do it ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2c8a36e015d,0FD5B95A957D,If students were allowed to design these projects themselves it would give them the will and incentive to do it because they would have designed it in a way that it would seem interesting to them ,Claim,Effective,,,
+31eba7adfa33,0FD5B95A957D,"It would help break away from their habit of carelessly doing it and having them get creative with their project and make something astonishing, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c9402257c99,0FD5B95A957D,By letting students design their own projects to do over the summer it also helps them develop real life skills that they can use in the workplace. Students dont tend to learn anything new over the summer since they are focused on their break and enjoying it as much as possible but doing a project that takes time and interests them helps them learn what goes into making a project and what the requirements are. This helps students to use their new found abilities in the workplace to much more easily express their creativity since they now know the tools to show it. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+5396bebe9f9e,0FD5B95A957D,"When teachers make summer projects for students it makes it harder for a student to care about the project because they didnt really have a part in making it, so if the teachers decide on making a project based on a topic a student doesnt like they wouldnt be as interested. It would lead to them wanting to do the bear minimum and be done with it, never even inspiring them use their creativity ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5b7e1f07748,0FD5B95A957D,Which is why when a student makes their own project they can be more creative and choose a topic or idea that interests them related to the class doing their best effort to portray how much they care about it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c77b2d12b588,0FD5B95A957D,It could be argued that if students made their own projects they would make it easy that it wouldnt take any time for them to finish it. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+588865be4508,0FD5B95A957D,Although some students would just want to be done with their project and do something easy most students would want to use this project as an opportunity to get their point and ideas across ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+93804ac28038,0FD5B95A957D,"When a person cares about something they want it to be the best , so when a student designs a project in which they care about they would obviously want to do their best since they put so much work into it. So saying that a student wouldnt care about a project they created would be wrong since even if they did design a bad project they would be the one doing it and would make it much harder for themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+194bceb88ae0,0FD5B95A957D,There is so much good that can come out of letting students design their own projects not only for them but for their future as well. If teachers give students the opportunity to design their own project then they would be teaching more than the class but skills they can use in the future as well. Since creativity is the backbone of everything in the world when teachers start to make new ideas to have students think more creatively it helps the development of new ideas and innovations in the future. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4380c6e83b2c,1006FE578078,Making extracurricular activities mandatory for students is not a valid rule that should be enforced. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b8834b6f0cdb,1006FE578078,"I don't agree that all students should have to participate in one extracurricular activity, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+413e6ad4af72,1006FE578078,whether students graduate or not shouldn't be determined by an extracurricular activity that they may or may not have done ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ff5414d24375,1006FE578078,most of the students already do an out of school activity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e4afd2e6d3d6,1006FE578078,students shouldn't be forced to do something that they dont want to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d66c12cc3407,1006FE578078,"Just because they didn't take part in the chess club, or the yearbook committee doesn't mean that they should be held back. Someone could be the next Albert Einstein and focus on school so much that he didn't have time for extracurricular activities, but you decide to hold him back because of a silly little thing he didn't do. Whether students do extracurricular activities or not shouldn't determine if they proceed to learn new things. The administrators should look at their grades and their work habits. It does not make a valid reason for them to be robbed of their opportunity to be smarter, if they just didn't participate in an extracurricular activity. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3a494d2112f3,1006FE578078,"What if you dont have time? Most students already do an after school activity like sports, or a youth group. Some students even do multiple sports and still balance that with school. So for them to try and balance their after school activities, school, and now an extracurricular activity, it would be chaos. Students already go through enough stress with peer pressure, and their grades, and maybe just problems at home, so they shouldn't have to worry about this too. For example, maybe some students want to get a scholarship through playing a sport,and maybe their really good and actually have a chance at getting one. If you enforce that rule they would have to focus less on their sport and more on the extracurricular activity. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+204a0d7b914b,1006FE578078,"Some students have trouble socializing with others. So maybe they didn't apply for an activity because they just didn't want too. Some students also enjoy their free time, time where they can do homework, be on their electronic devices, or just take a nap. So they didn't want to do an extracurricular activity because they didn't want to give up their free time. Students shouldn't have to feel like they are forced to do something. I mean it is called extracurricular activity for a reason, because it's for extra credit, so it shouldn't be a mandatory thing that they have to do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8cab1a20ad9d,1006FE578078,"Students graduating shouldn't be decided by if they did an extracurricular activity or not,and the students who already do after school activities don't have time for for extracurricular things,and students should not have to be pressured to do something if its not mandatory, so I don't agree that students should have to take part in an extracurricular activity. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6ef3a1e5a09d,1028F5A588AA,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" the author describes the new technology facial Action Coding System or FACS which allows a computer to pick up on what you feel like and how you are feeling. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a44f41216a31,1028F5A588AA,I claim that the use of FACS in a class room enviroment could have used but mostly believe it is not a valuable resource in class. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5fa30a138939,1028F5A588AA,"One reason why It is not a vaulable resource is it only programed to read six basic human emotions which are Happieness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb8e9da3f739,1028F5A588AA,"The human body has way more than just six emotions so getting a high accuracy reading on how you are really feeling is out of the question because FACS uses the a process of a 3-D model Dr. Huang states ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles."" This quote explains that it has to use a way of making a model which can sometimes take some time depending on the processing power of the computer not only that but human emotions can change quite quickly and if the pc doesnt make the model fast enough the computer can easly fail at getting and accuarate reading. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+39af54cab7b4,1028F5A588AA,Another reason why it is invaulable is that a human is already prepared to read another persons emotions because it is a task that is already done each and everyday. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7f5cec37d285,1028F5A588AA,"Dr. Huang is talking about the device using video images to pick up the emotions of each person. Dr. H states ""using video imagery, The new emotion recognition software tracks these facial movments in a real face or on a painted face."" This quote brings to light that the machine can read emotions but one could say since it is still in new development that not all of the bugs or glitches have been worked out not only that but you also have to devote more resources to keep the machine working which can average to be a heafty hit to your wallet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5f74738d0f37,1028F5A588AA,Another person could say it is vaulable to help students and keep them entertained in a lesson and switch it up a bit. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+24f1d6c6749b,1028F5A588AA,"Dr. Huang is talking about how it can change the ads you see and veiw if you dont look happy when you look at them. Dr. Huang states ""For example when a web ad appears on your screen and you smile a similar ad may follow, But if you frown the next ad will be different. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" Dr. Huang predicts. This Quote and prediction of Dr. Huang states that is has potential to keep students intrestred into work ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b08a4ee1c7b7,1028F5A588AA,but the problem being is that a program so complex like that requires so much code and algorithms that it requires a beffy computer to run so you would need to make multiple servers capable of holding that much information not only that but the school would have to divert much more of their budget toward stronger computers ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bfd38f036812,1028F5A588AA,"Dr. Huang states Your home Pc cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode smiles"" This saying from Dr. Huang proves that a PC for home use is not strong enough for this program so what makes you average home pc different from a school one other than filters put on the pc which reduces preformance but the worse thing that could happen is what if the power happens to shut down or go out do to a surge that program requires power to run so that is also a big problem. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5e1886aebf2c,1028F5A588AA,"In conclusion, The use of FACS in a classroom enviroment sounds like a great idea but when you put it in different catagories it fails in almost every one of them you dont need a computer to read emotions when a human is perfectly capable of know how you feel even if it is just a little bit. The schools will need more funding diverted to even run the program and keep it working when schools already have a budget that they have to work on and they will need to be prepared to do something if the power goes out because that system will not run if it has incffecient power. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+80077636b6b4,1037273E86D9,"The curiousity about Mars has been going on for centuries.
+
+People say that there is or once was life on Mars, and now they are saying that there is a face on Mars.
+
+Humans all around the world have questioned whether the ""Face"" was created by aliens or just a natural landform. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8e97dcbf20db,1037273E86D9,it's just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+353a9a214242,1037273E86D9,"In 1976, Viking 1 took photos of Mars and found a huge rock formation that remebled a human head with shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.
+
+This was soon to be known as the ""Face on Mars"". 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6e79b9daa923,1037273E86D9,"People made a huge deal out of it.
+
+The ""Face on Mars"" appeared in books, magazines, and radio talk shows.
+
+Some people even say it appeared in haunted grocery store checkouts.
+
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a8677bf9911,1037273E86D9,"On April 5, 1998, NASA's MGS flew over Cydonia, the siting of the face, to snap more picture to reveal that the Face was just a natural landform and nothing more ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+46535e550d93,1037273E86D9,"The majority of people accepted this statement, but there was a select few people who say that aliens made the Face. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cc99c4c2e587,1037273E86D9,"The Face Theorists weren't satisfied with it being just a landform and tried to find evidence to prove NASA wrong.
+
+The Face Theorists found out that the location and date of the April '98 photo was during a cloudy winter.
+
+Skeptics said that the alien markings were hidden by the haze. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19d4def5de92,1037273E86D9,"Three years later, NASA proved our skeptical theorists wrong again. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7869a0b74c1d,1037273E86D9,"With advanced technology, the right location, and the right season, NASA got the clear picture of the Face they needed to show that it was just a landform.
+
+NASA even suggests that it may be a butte or mesa ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ebc56910b6ac,1037273E86D9,"Sorry Face Theorists, but NASA
+
+has crushed your dreams multiple times.
+
+The ""Face on Mars"" is just a landform.
+
+Nothing more and nothing less ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b2b0f67e96f4,103B05DC95C8,I'm here to tell you that the face on mars is not the face to a martian ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ccbdac4fee89,103B05DC95C8,but there is always both sides to a situation like this. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f1fdf1681fb3,103B05DC95C8,I'm a scientist and there are some explanation to why this face exsict on both sides ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3fb0490168c7,103B05DC95C8,"My side is that the face on mars could be seen wrong, it could be a pile of rocks, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2206242aed43,103B05DC95C8,"and there is many wierd things on this planet with weird shapes, it cant always be martians or aliens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dcd2c8a75c93,103B05DC95C8,So to start this off it could be a alien but there is a strong possibility that its not either. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8f291e76f152,103B05DC95C8,"First the face is way to larg to be an actual face, it say it the artical the it is measured in meters, thats almost impossible ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1570964208db,103B05DC95C8,"It also says in the artical that the face on mars was just an illusion caused by the shadowing on the rocks to make it look like a face. If you look furter into the artical it says that everytime they went across the planet that it looked exactly the same. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3ce3e509cf7,103B05DC95C8,"It is a real debate on whether the face is real or not. There is also strong evidence on both sides, but NASA has alot of proof that it isn't an alien, they could be hiding it or they can be wrong.        ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+dbf1373431e4,1065173BBE31,Limiting car usage is a discrase ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+9df6f0ce63ab,1065173BBE31,"Why stop making cars when thats what we need the most in this world, with out a car we cant go no where. What they should do is cut down the price to a lower price cause not everyone in this world is a multi millioner. For example on paragraph 12 it says almost 4,000 drivers were fine,according to Reuters ... Twenty seven people had their cars imounded for their reactions to the fine, thats just crazy how they take cars away from people just because of their actions against the fine.
+
+Thats easier to imagine than a car-free Champs Elysees. Congestion was down 60% in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog. Diesel fuel was blamed, sinced Franced has. . . a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up to 67% of vehicles in france, compared to a 53.3% average of diesel engnes in the rest of Western Europe, according to Reuters.
+
+Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals... Last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.
+
+The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.
+
+In a program thats set to spraed to other countries millions of Colombians hiked,biked skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffics.
+
+It was the third year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permmitted for the Day with out cars in the capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Vialators faced $25 fines.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea7a69e0029a,1073917E4351,Venus is the second plan next to the sun. The closes to even being like Earth. But Venus isn't what it look like when you land or try to sent anything there. This could also be harmfull to us humans ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e4ab7773630,1073917E4351,"In the article, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"",The author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit depite the danger to humans, the personal risks and approaching it presents. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+f1e045016076,1073917E4351,"People have try to get to Venus by senting humans and object there. But the danger to humans can be dangerouse to them. In the article, "" The Ceallenge of Exploring Venus"",these quote saids that, "" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus."" ( pargraphe 3,The Challenge of Exploring Venus.). "" Even mor challenging are the clouds of highly crorrosive sulfuric acid in the Venus's atmosphere."" ( paragraphe 3,The chanllege of Exploring Venus ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5563a7e8c17,1073917E4351,.These quote shows that Venus is too dangers to sent humans there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+946044faae0e,1073917E4351,The air is thick for humans and the clouds have high corrosive sulfuric acid. These things can harm humans breathing by senting them to Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0a882cb13f2,1073917E4351,Nasa might have try senting humans and object to Venus. But none of them were about to get samples from Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2983dee1d3f,1073917E4351,"n the article,""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", it has said that,"" More importantly,researcher cannot take samples of rock,gas or anything else from a distance."" ( paragraph 6,The Challenge of Exploring Venus).""Therefore,scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks."" (paragraph 6,The challenge of Exploring Venus).These quote said that even if they try to get closer,the coditions of the ground won't allow it to land. it would only flow around it. Not just that but it they do get close then they will have to take the risk for it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fb9d7492bb7,1073917E4351,"Nasa have been working on geting to venus. Even if they don't made it there,they are still trying to approach it. In the article,""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"". They have said,""NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For examples,some simlified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such coditions."" ( paragraph 7,The Challenge of Exploring Venus).""Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers."" ( paragraph 7,The Challenge of Exploring Venus) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c8136b0874e7,1073917E4351,they have found new and old ways to approach Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f745ce34009c,1073917E4351,"And some even have lasted longer then they expected. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bed5add7d819,1073917E4351,"Venus is a plant that everyone have Challeng. But some ever close to getting there. The author haved suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers for humans,the risk and approaching it's presents. Never stopping them from doing so. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+eb736bf65b72,10D09AB4D6C7,"Extracurricular activities have been a controversial topic of discussion for decades. Parents, teachers, students, and principals have felt the need to express their opinion on the implementation of extracurricular activities. I attend Generic_School, a place where students have many extracurricular activities to choose from, all of which take place after the school day is over. Some choose to attend and others choose to abstain. I partake in them occasionally, but I tend to go home once the final bell rings. That was before my principal decided that all
+
+Generic_School students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity, whether it be sports, yearbook design, student council, or something else. This decree has denied the freedom of choice to not only me, but hundreds of other students at my school with regards to extracurricular activities. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ed4b452fd3f6,10D09AB4D6C7,I strongly disagree with the decision of my principal on this matter ,Position,Adequate,,,
+81606fd54cbd,10D09AB4D6C7,because forcing students to participate in extracurricular activities exhausts students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b74810d0d4ce,10D09AB4D6C7,tremendously decreases the time that a student has to complete schoolwork assigned to them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e6829bffa24f,10D09AB4D6C7,"rather than giving students time to relax, it depletes their energy. Generic_School students are tired as it is. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d7bc0b52c54b,10D09AB4D6C7,"To understand how fatigued they are, allow me to use an example of someone who is exhausted without the addition of extracurricular activities to their schedule: me. I wake up at 5:50, board my school bus at 6:30, attend school from 7:30 to 2:15, get home at 3:00, and do homework for four hours before eating dinner and going to sleep. Add three hours to the mix and I am going to bed at 11:00, giving me only six hours to sleep. Not seven, not eight, not nine, and certainly not ten. Following a routine where there is only time for six hours of sleep decreases concentration, slows thinking, damages memory, and can even stunt growth during puberty. Generic_School students cannot simply adapt to the new conditions. No middle school student can. That is why Generic_School students should not have to chronically attend extracurricular activities because it hurts students more than it helps them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3f9e11e791fc,10D09AB4D6C7,"rather than giving students a sacred time and place to complete schoolwork, it massively decreases work and study time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8a560997676a,10D09AB4D6C7,"At Generic_School Middle School, there is a particular extracurricular activity called ""Generic_Name's Work Zone"" or ""WWZ."" WWZ is a place where students are able to sit down and complete schoolwork. Those that attend for the sole purpose of doing work choose to do so at Generic_Name's Work Zone rather than at home because WWZ is a silent work area, which should aid concentration. The problem is that most Generic_School students who attend do not come there to do work or to study but to instead play games which can distract those who are trying to work. Trust me, I know from experience. I could not do more than 30 minutes of work before being sucked into my cell phone. WWZ lasts for an hour, only half of which I used for work. That is why I stopped going. However, I do not have that option anymore now that I must participate in at least one extracurricular activity and somehow make time to work without being distracted, however difficult it may be. That is why Generic_School students should not have to routinely attend extracurricular activities because it takes work and study time away from them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+81d4b6187e83,10D09AB4D6C7,"I strongly disagree with the decision of my principal because forcing Generic_School students to participate in extracurricular activities wears them out and decreases the time that a Generic_School student has to finish assigned work. First of all, extracurricular activities melt a student's energy and can negatively impact a student's health and well-being. Second, extracurricular activities lead to students being distracted, ultimately depleting work and study time. Extracurricular activities were supposed to be a way to help students complete work, come to school happier, and get better grades. However, force-feeding extracurricular activities to Generic_School students will not produce the desired effect that my principal hopes it will, and that is a fact. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ac65257c7619,10F4FEDEF052,Giving students summer projects keeps their brains functioning. Some schools require that students complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+17b369240fec,10F4FEDEF052,summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5d9e885eec9f,10F4FEDEF052,"they know the content, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+054842f0028e,10F4FEDEF052,have more resources ,Claim,Effective,,,
+239c5af80c77,10F4FEDEF052,"have more experience. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+de9c621d0fa4,10F4FEDEF052,All teachers know what content they will be teaching giving them an edge to designing summer projects for students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+08c2cc7bde33,10F4FEDEF052,"With an understanding of the content they will able to create projects that will be beneficial to the the students. Moreover, the teacher can plan summer projects that include information that the students will learn throughout the school giving the students a head start. For example, a math teacher might give his or her student a math related summer project which will cover topics that will be learn't in the upcoming school year. This makes the project something that will be helpful for the students and keeps their minds working. It will also make their school year easier since they've already learned some topics through the summer project. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+63024494f8c1,10F4FEDEF052,Teachers also have more resources to be able to produce summer projects for students to keep them engaged. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+906902980803,10F4FEDEF052,"Many teachers attend workshops and meetings to learn about ways to make their lessons better. This gives them immense amounts of resources they could use to put together helpful summer projects. They also have connections to other teachers and programs that students don't have the access to. These connections are important since they provide useful information. With that said, teachers would produce better summer projects than students would. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+80e1cdaca33d,10F4FEDEF052,"Finally, teachers have more experience when it comes to designing projects ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a24dc8573ec1,10F4FEDEF052,"A big part of a teachers jobs is to create projects and worksheets for their students all year long. This gives them experience regrading what the students will enjoy and how to plan the projects. They would also know how to assure that the students are learning but in a fun way based off their experience. Teachers go through college to learn all this, so they have a lot of experience and a good understanding of what projects should entail. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e597bae495c,10F4FEDEF052,"However, some might say students should be able to design the summer projects because they are the ones that have to do it ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+448430d4347a,10F4FEDEF052,It is true that students are the ones that have to complete the projects but the teachers know what will be better for the students to help benefit them ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c2e69b87653d,10F4FEDEF052,"For example, a student might create a project where they have to play video games. This would not benefit the students in anyway since they will not be learning anything ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fab43f32a246,10F4FEDEF052,"Therefore, summer projects should be designed by teachers because they know the content, have more resources and have more experience to assure that students continue learning during their break.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8d99807b6030,10F8D3AD9F03,"Joining the Seagoing Cowboys program is a great place to help with horses, young cows, and mules ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc93dbf24e7c,10F8D3AD9F03,"You can travel the world and see places like China, Europe, Greece, and Italy. They have unique ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d43350d87b64,10F8D3AD9F03,You also can have fun being on a ship. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a669354b1619,10F8D3AD9F03,"You can plat baseball and volleyball games in the emty holds where the animals were. You also can play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. The games helped pass the time when you're on the ship. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79069967cfec,10F8D3AD9F03,You also get to help people that are in need in other countries ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2773b6912ce5,10F8D3AD9F03,"You could help the countries recover their food supply, animals, and more. It could be fun caring for an animal like it was your own pet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b724fb904917,10F8D3AD9F03,being a Seagoing Cowboy would be a fun job to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d9063041082f,10F8D3AD9F03,It will help you experience a once in a lifetime thing. You could be able to go to remarkable places in the world. It also could teach you how to learn responsibility. The adventure will be unbelievable. I would be exciting to be a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+519dd0303df3,1155F7A18D6C,"Venus is the second planet. Sometime, NASA called venus the Evening Star, because it's one of the brightest light in the night sky ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+eafe9f519d39,1155F7A18D6C,"Venus is closest to earth, and earth has a twin. The differences between mars and venus is that sometimes we are esloser to mars and sometimes we are colser to venus, because venus is sometimes around the corner in space and human are sent to numerous spacecraft. No spacesraft has survived more than a few hours not a single spaceship has touched down on venus's more than three decades. When the spacesship trys to land it can't because venus is almost 97 percent caron dioxide blankets venus and the most challenging is that venus have clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venuss atmosphere. Venus temperatures average is over 800 degrees fahenheit. Not many people has land on venus because how hot the planet is and if they are up thirty plus miles above the surface it's still going to be toasty at around 170 degrees. The most importsntly, researchers cannot take samples of rock gas, or anything elae from a distance. The scientists to see the conduct to thorough mission is to understand venus they need to get close and personal despite the risks. A old technology called mechanical computers the devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and it played an important role in 1940s during the world war 2. It's danger to be on venus it's so hot we won't survived by trying to land on it it's 800 degrees on the planet. Venus might be the second to the sun but mercury is closer to our sun and venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, but merury is closer to the sun. The high pressure and heat vennusian geology and weather presen is like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and the frequent lighting strikes to probes of seeking to the land on its surface. NACA try to challenge them self they been trying to find a way to land on venus and makes sure that the spaceship can land on venus. NASA are still working on a spaceship to land more than a few hours so they can see more things about venus that we don't know about. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+371bdac34dbb,116A338694CB,"This article is about a small town near the french and swiss borders its name is Vauban. Vauban ha a unique community they have no cars!. yeah thats right no cars there is a no automobile law in this small town which makes a lot of people like the mother of two ms. Heidrun walter. she says that she is ""much happier this way because when i had a car i was always tense"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+189d90b53628,116A338694CB,people could walk down the street and not worry about wether or not a person is going to lose control of their car and smash into them or even worse ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97a6c5fca5e4,116A338694CB,"In 2006 the united states and other areas started to try these things and they called it ""smart planning"". car ownership is allowed but there are only two parking areas-large garages at the edge of the development where a car-owner buys a space for $40,000, along with a home. vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, is the most advanced experiment in low car suburban life. ""All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,"" said david goldberg.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee4dc6c6d368,11823089B61E,This story about Venus talks about how NASA wants to study the planet. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cbeb40b8e51f,11823089B61E,"Evening star""is what they call Venus. The nickname gaive the rung idea of Venus. Peolpe where misstaking that Venus is a star. Venus it's a own plant. In the text says ""Venus is the second plant from our sun."" In phragraph one. Reserchers study Venus becouse backthen is was closer to earth. Dispise of Venus bing dangers. Reserchers what to fide out if it still hase some earth fechers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+431e35d093ea,11823089B61E,NASA whats to get information about Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b008a098f5d6,11823089B61E,"One of the idea of NASA is to seand peolpe to Venus. People will hover throw space. In the text says""our jet airplanes travel at higher altitude to fly over may storms.""In phragraph five. Flying aroud Venus is not placent. Dispice that Venuse is very hot,bing above is about 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The air pressure is lower like the sea leveal. Resiving infromation in venus is limited becouse of how much lights it gives. We can not take anying from mars frome a distance. NASA have not founed a way to get far in to Venus. With this problem NASA takes it risky or as a challeng. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2922a14d15e1,11823089B61E,Anuther way to resive infromation is by sending elatronics to Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1e28e99dbfbb,11823089B61E,"NASA had sent mutuple objets to mars. The objet semes to only servive fore some few three weeks. In oder to make somthing beter to sent in Venus is lookng at obld technology. Looking at phragraph siven it tells us that ""Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers."". NASA uesd newer technology but it has not over three weeks. Sending mechens that are made with meatel it will mealt or over heat because of the heat in Venus. With the old mechens and with the newer we will fined a more resestent salustion that can healp us with information. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50d9a9c5115a,11823089B61E,One day we will have the limets to go in Venus. NASA has not gavie up Venus. Venus is valuble to us not olny because it's just a nuther resuers but because it will let us have the lemits to explore other plants. I do balive that we should know other plants. We shouled tot be limited with awer inmagination. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+606f058cfb22,11950E4412E5,"Summer break is the most anticipated time of year for students and teachers because it is a grace period that allows for relaxation and refreshment,of one's soul. The summer sees,the mental maturation of many students without the hindrance of a classroom,holding them back. The learning experience offered in a classroom setting is limited only to what the teacher and state permits. Students are not fully able to express their learning passions because they are forced to learn what the teacher permits. Whereas, during the summer students are free to conduct their own personal investigations on topics that peak their interest, resulting in a much maturer student by the time fall rolls around. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+831e339d744d,11950E4412E5,"To coincide with the theme of change and growth summer promotes, students should have the ability to choose their own projects, to further their educational experience and mental development, without the influence of a teacher. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+6f15eab533b6,11950E4412E5,"The ability for students to choose their own summer projects would enhance their outlook on education,because they would study topics that interest them,and not teacher selected topics that would seem like a task. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f802921ec350,11950E4412E5,"It is a scientifically proven fact that students retain knowledge that speaks to their own curiosities and that holds the most relevance to them. During the summer, many students travel to new places or try new things. For example, last summer I was blessed with the opportunity to travel to Japan with my friends and family. While I was there I tried new cuisines,participated in festivities and I was able to learn about their history. My time in Japan, sparked an interest that I never knew I had in Japanese Geisha. I spent hours upon hours researching everything I could on them. But, my research was limited because I had to complete an AP Human Geography summer assignment administered by my future teacher. My assignment was to write a paper and create a brochure about a country. I thought it would be a perfect opportunity to write all about my trip to Japan. That is until I realized the teacher had already selected countries based on our last names. I was stuck with Great Britain, a country I already had a lot of knowledge of from history class and videos. I like many students completed the assignment without gaining any new information because doing the project felt as if it were a chore. Though,I do still remember the information I learned from conducting my own research into Geisha. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ec02be17a31,11950E4412E5,Many teachers would argue that a student designed summer project would lack information or seem to rushed. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8cc8f4493dcd,11950E4412E5,"Which would not be the case at all. Many students would take their time in crafting a project that meets all standards and would probably write more than what is expected, due to the project peaking their interest. Teachers would in fact, see an increase of higher marks. However, if a teacher feels that the project is not up to standards they could always low score it and have the student try again. In allowing students to design their own project teachers will receive projects that exceed all requirements due to the students behind the projects being interested in what they were learning. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+50f063c9d64e,11950E4412E5,"If students were able to create their own summer projects, the result would be a more creative,responsible and independent thinking person ",Claim,Effective,,,
+49eacc878070,11950E4412E5,"Teacher designed projects allow no room for creativity nor responsibility because there are guidelines and an examples set in place by the teacher,students have to follow. Thus, resulting in one hundred or more projects that all sound the same and lack any indication of the student's voice. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+337cc08baa57,11950E4412E5,"Teachers would argue that summer projects must be designed by them, so that all students are able to receive full credit. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+18ede080d744,11950E4412E5,"Which is great in theory,but not in the long run. It does not benefit the student to have a guideline or rubric, it only benefits the teacher because the projects would be easier to grade. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e3d93e205dbf,11950E4412E5,"In the future, once students start working, supervisors will not give them examples of how to properly execute a project. For example, my mother is a graphic designer who is required to come with new ideas for campaigns, brochures and websites. Her boss isn't giving her instructions on how to complete the tasks, at all. She must be responsible in using her mind to come up with creative new ideas that she thinks would satisfy her boss. However, at her old job all the graphic designers were given an example they had to follow. Which resulted in the closing of her old company because they only produced the same design. Luckily for mom, she was able to find another job fast because she was to create designs without assistance. The skills my mother used to think creatively and on her own, was taught in school. But, with teachers designing projects, students get used to a formula they have to follow and are not taking responsibility for their own thinking. Students creating their own summer projects would force students to take time and think of a project that they think would satisfy their teacher. It would stimulate new thoughts and force them to activate the create side of their brain that has not been used for a while,due to teachers constantly creating a rubric and examples for the student. The summer is a perfect opportunity for a student designed project because they would have time to develop their thoughts. Teachers shouldn't design summer projects because it aides in diminishing a student's ability to creatively solve projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b87b6c2bfdd9,11950E4412E5,Students should have the ability to create their own summer assignments because it would promote mental and educational growth that would otherwise be hindered in a classroom setting. Summer break allows students to embark on new experiences that can further expand their knowledge on topics that interest them. It would also allow more time for students to develop their ideas for the project. Which would strengthen their creativity and responsibility skills. Student designed projects would help grow character.                   ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+76c46d88a9a1,11B9AC1814C8,"People have studied the many planets in our solar system and are fastinated by them. People have also studied the solar system to help explore and give information about the planets around us. One planet that scientists have studied for a good amount of time is Venus since it shows that at one time, the planet might have inhabited living organisms. However, Venus is a very dangerous planet since many attempts of landing spacecraft has failed on Venus and the clouds of the planet are made of sulfuric acid. Venus is not worth the pursuit of knowledge since the planet has a very dangerous enviorment for humans and that not a single spacecraft has landed safely on the planet and returned. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e1f8c8709b9a,11B9AC1814C8,The cost and risk of exploring Venus is not worth the infromation we would achieve. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+164ff3213938,11B9AC1814C8,Venus has a enviorment of very dangerous elements that can harm many living organisms and even nonliving objects ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+971f8625a092,11B9AC1814C8,"According to the article, 97 percent of the atmosphere of Venus is carbon dioxide, which is unable to be breathed by humans. Another detail the article states is that on the surface of the planet, the average temperatures is over eight hundred degrees. The climate and enviorment of Venus is too dangerous for exploration. The planet does not hold nowhere near a safe enviorment for people or even machine. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+616053f8cd46,11B9AC1814C8,Another detail about Venus is that no spacecfaft has made a journey back from the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1c71eb3612f,11B9AC1814C8,"The article says, ¨... humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world,¨ and then says ¨... since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.¨ If a spacecraft made by people can not survive the landing on Venus numerous times, how can we even come close to surviving the trip? Venus is too dangerous to explore and it is a waste to even send a spacecraft. The spacecrafts cost a good amount of money to make and for them to be wasted on a inhospitable planet is not worth the information we would achieve. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1990bb58e2cd,11B9AC1814C8,NASA has came up with a ¨solution¨ of the problemof gaining knowledge of Venus which is for a vehicle to hover over Venus and scientists would safely observe the planet that way. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6e40e43574aa,11B9AC1814C8,"However, the article says that this can only give us a limited amount of information on Venus since the planet has a very dense atmosphere. The effort of creating a vehicle to hover the planet only to gain bits of knowledge is redundant and is not going the benefit anyone´s cause. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+4c2688e77d3c,11B9AC1814C8,"Venus is not worth the time, effort and resources to explore. The planet proves to be too dangerous for mankind and even for machines. Curiosity is not sufficiant enough of a reason to explore and learn about a inhospitable planet unless it is going to benefit mankind more than what it costed to gain that information. The resources that are going to Venus should be redirected to another cause that will benefit society and life as we know it. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9402bfbb33c5,1248C86D1F56,"The new technology it was created by, what does it do,is it a good thing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a97f2a273519,1248C86D1F56,"The software is the latest innovation fro professer. Thomas Huang,of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the Universiy of illinos,working in collaboation with Professer Nicu. Sebe of the University. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better way for human and coumputers to communicate.
+
+The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face;all 44 major muscles in the the model must move like humans muscels. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit."" Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of pyschologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman,creator of FACS.
+
+They want to use this technology to help in a classroom to see when a kid is confused or boerd to help them to plan lesson that the kids will learn from. Eckman has claaified six basic emotions happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of facial muscles ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ffe547bdb117,1248C86D1F56,I think we should use the new technology in classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9677673a7d6b,1248C86D1F56,because I think I will become dectration to kids because they will want to play with it to see her they feel. This type of technology should be use for treapist to help read patient when they are talk about their life so the treapist know how they felt about that part in there life. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eaa22311a1c8,126BF47F3939,The use of this technology for a classroom full of students will not be valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c457abecf57a,126BF47F3939,Although it would be interesting to see what the students are feeling during a lesson. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1332e6d4c1f6,126BF47F3939,How is the data going to be of use in science? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+513f6aae930f,126BF47F3939,"The students can express their feelings, but what are the researchers going to do with this information. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0bb14f86c48f,126BF47F3939,"This technology should be used, but not in the classroom. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4067d320b517,126BF47F3939,If we do end up using the system to detect emotions where will the data go. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd1b16de087a,126BF47F3939,"It will help the video game industry with the evidence from paragraph 6 ""The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8a98db1f94a,126BF47F3939,"Why only put this into a classroom put it into the robots we are building today so they seem more human-like, so they can become more advanced than a ordinary robot ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffaddf7031e6,126BF47F3939,"The direction the researchers are taking are great, but the choice of where to put it needs to be different. Just putting it into a classroom would be a waste of time and money. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2ac3e8699f52,126BF47F3939,"There is so much wasted potential if the system is put into a classroom.
+
+we could use this technology for bigger and better things. For instance better facial recognition security systems so it can be more accurate reading faces and does not open or let in anyone that looks like the person. Or lock the person out of anything that is protected by facial recognition. Another example of how this could be useful in other ways is the facial recognition can be used in the police force to find a match of a person that was caught on camera to be tracked down and captured. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+558b770fdef0,126BF47F3939,The way that the researchers are using it for is inefficient and wasteful and should not be implemented in classrooms. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6786dd98fba8,129497C3E0FC,so you want to take all the cars out of the city ok cool ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c0890f509c10,129497C3E0FC,"this will save the pepol like 1,000,000 dolers a year ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebe90365ac0f,129497C3E0FC,reduce polution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f6152201fc70,129497C3E0FC,i gess its a good idea but on the other hand nah i mean lookif pepal want to ruin the world with gas thats there choce man ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+1600954b28a9,129497C3E0FC,the eirth is cool so why distroit with gasis or something ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b4bdc46dc8f7,12A49BF3B556,""" your principle has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity"". How would you feel if your principle has made this decision?, and would you agree with this or disagree?. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8dca3c5fdb69,12A49BF3B556,"I feel as though, the principle has made the right desicion. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f55b63e69844,12A49BF3B556,"I agree with this desicion because, this desicion could do everyone some good. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f53f5d47a087,12A49BF3B556,"Doing some type of sport or even working on the school news paper could be fun. It would be expecially good for parents. Why? you might ask because, the students won't come home as early, and the parents will have time to run erin's and get some stuff done before their children get home. The parents will also be able to just have more time to their selves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07c674ccaa14,12A49BF3B556,this could be helpful to the children mentally and physically. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7492b3cc1ebe,12A49BF3B556,"Three out of four children and teens spend more than seven hours on their phone or watching television. These devises put out blue light into the the eye which is bad because, this can cause straining in the eye or even total blindness. when you are on your phone most of the time you have acess to the internet which means you can get on social media websites. When on websites like snapchat and instagram teens tend to compare their selves to others, and if they aren't up to par to look like ""pretty"" people they can get sad and form some type of depression. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea37a4a4462f,12A49BF3B556,"Overall, students should build more life skills and social skills, and adding extracurricular activity's to the students day can help with that. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b4b4d1c8933,12A49BF3B556,"building life skills at a younger age can be great so, when you get out into the world you'll atleast know some key factors to living. Building social skills is great too. Lets say you get a job in marketing, you need to be social, have great speech, and be outgoing. In fact, you need social skills for any job. The principle making the desicion to add an extracurricular activity's to students day at school was and great idea. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a648f0260ca,12A49BF3B556,"adding an extracurricular activity to all of the student body would be an great idea because, it could be benifial to students, parents. and teachers. Building social skills. Life skills, and just being productive has all to do with adding an extracurricular activity to a students day. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9499c209950f,12A61F91FC80,In the article they are talking about a new technology called Facial Action Coding System where the computer can identify human emotions. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d4ab33e57373,12A61F91FC80,I think that this new technology can be very valuable for teachers in schools to know when a student is sad or upset. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+782d7afb4e59,12A61F91FC80,The computer can help a teacher/adult to understand when a student is in need of a talk or needs to express their emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fc3b66d2551,12A61F91FC80,This is also very valuable because it could potentially save a life in bad situations. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e1a424fad88,12A61F91FC80,"This system can alert a teacher or anyone when there might be something wrong with a person, whether it is good or bad. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4a1a2aff13a,12A61F91FC80,"To be able to understand how a person feels may be one of the best new technologies created. Knowing when a person is feeling sad, angry, happy, etc, can really be great for if they need someone to talk to. It could make things better or make things not so good. Just having those options of emotions to be recognized is something very amazing. Even though this system can't contol your emotions or thoughts, it can really help to understand when there is something good or bad going on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41d6e6891642,12A61F91FC80,I think another use for this could be in hospitals to detect if a patient is lying about their emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d04859ab84fe,12A61F91FC80,"Even though a patient in a hospital may not like this because it can see their true emotions, it might be able to help them in the long run. If this technology can help manage what another person is feeling then it can make them see whats really going on, even if they lie about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d79a01e2bc6f,12A61F91FC80,"The computer will construct a 3-D model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit."" Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. All of humans show the same facial expressions but maybe some at different times. The Mona Lisa demonstration is intened to bring a smile to our face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c78a2b1626f0,12C08C0F6EE1,Is getting emotional facial recognization the best way to go with technology? Computers are getting smarter and it doesn't sound like it will be slowing down any time soon. When scientests and computer programers combine it can be a beautiful thing. Scientests are developing better ways for humans and computers to comunicate. With new encoding and development of software scientests have now created a way for a computer to tell how someone is feeling by using their facial muscles. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b6407becbad9,12C08C0F6EE1,"The new programing will be a positive thing, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+699664579e6a,12C08C0F6EE1,muscles in the face just act naturally ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f1458202ed07,12C08C0F6EE1,the encoding is complex ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aa46b103aa9b,12C08C0F6EE1,the new technology could be coming to local classrooms. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bcb2ac0e7b3,12C08C0F6EE1,The Scientests have a whole process. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+64c446e3fadd,12C08C0F6EE1,"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the face and has all 44 major muscles that must move like human muscles (D'Alto 3). All of the muscle units that work together as one is called an ""action unit."" Since all facial emotions are universal the technology could go worldwide once improved. The software could also identify mixed emotions. The technology reads how major muscles move and show emotion. With each emotion that is showed they compare it to a neutral face. Every day humans do the same thing. Humans read the face of other humans to try and tell how they are feeling. If they are sad or happy. There are six major emotions within the technology right now, there maybe more encoded at a later date. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c94575f6fe00,12C08C0F6EE1,With the new technology comes new computers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aba2bde7e19d,12C08C0F6EE1,"A home PC could not take the proper encoding right now. The scientests are working on something much better to try and get the home PC's to where they can encode them. The scientests new computer software stores similar anatomical information as an electric code (D'Alto 5). Although the home PC couldn't handle the encoding, they can give simple encoding to your home PC. The encdoing that can be given is simple instructions for differnent emotions. The simple encoding would not be able to read mixed emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9af8a9ea55eb,12C08C0F6EE1,The emotional facial reading could be coming to a local schools. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8c6a847effb,12C08C0F6EE1,"The new technology would be able to tell if a student was bored, or if they got confused. Then the computer could modify the lesson for the student to help them learn better. The technology could act like an effective human instructor. Must human communication is nonverbal. Emotional communication is also nonverbal. The studesnts could improve with one on one lesson plans. The studensts could also work at their own pace and have their own personal plans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b536e411d765,12C08C0F6EE1,"All the technology needs to understand how to read and comunicate with a human through facial features. The anatomy of a human is complex and hard to understand and encode into computers. The new programing will be a positive thing, muscles in the face just act naturally, the encoding is complex, and the new technology could be coming to local classrooms. Scientests are hard at work trying to make the new technology common and natural for everyone to use. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cf8f52b2f8b1,1300CBEB1F39,I stand with the principle on his decision ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f1e7ef456dea,1300CBEB1F39,I believe that participating in extracurricular activities has many benefits on a child's social life ,Claim,Effective,,,
+742a92a5a7b4,1300CBEB1F39,"Making friends while on a team or a club will be much easier, the students will have connections with others, and everyone will have something to talk about. Some students may find it hard to make friends, but by being in an extracurricular activity, there are many chances to find a long lasting pal. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f86203ec9262,1300CBEB1F39,"You may think, ""It's nice that the students can find a friend, but what if there is nothing they would like or want to participate in?"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+332f522ccf23,1300CBEB1F39,"Well, i'm sure there is something they would enjoy, because there are many options ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+12fd9e6963cb,1300CBEB1F39,"If a student is athletic, and likes to play sports, they can join one of the many sports teams. If a student likes to write, they can join the creative writing club. If they like to debate on topics, they can join the debate team. The possibilities are endless!
+
+Although there are many non academic options, there are many academic ones as well. Kids who may need help with a subject can come to tutoring sessions held by other wonderful students, who want to lend a helping hand. If a child has trouble focusing on their homework, there is homework club, a quiet place to work on schoolwork, where a teacher is always there to help, if need be. As you can see, there are many helpful options for students who want to work on homework or other school assignments. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+befc2803cbd4,1300CBEB1F39,Extracurricular activities can also help shape students into better citizens. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+348f6e725764,1300CBEB1F39,"There are many clubs that help students learn about acceptance, kindness, and taking care of our Earth and environment. Partnership club is where students work with special needs children. These students learn how to accept and help care for others who are a little bit different. Diversity club is where students who are all shapes, sizes, colors, and sexualities can learn about each others backgrounds, and the everyday struggles they may deal with because of how they act or look. Environmental club is where students can learn about how the environment is deteriorating and how we can help stop it from being destroyed. Also, they participate in many community service projects, from picking up trash, to measuring the PH balance in our water systems. Students learn everyday what being a better citizen means. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf68771aeb02,1300CBEB1F39,"asking students to participate in at least one extracurricular activity is a good idea. I believe that students school and social life will change for the better. It may take some time to see the positive effects that this new rule will have on the school, but there will definitely be a huge, great difference within the school's community.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2bd0470fbd81,130F9B6DCCF9,Having good guidelines and being told what the expectations are will give students a better chance at success. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+edf3ee8c1cee,130F9B6DCCF9,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1c51cedf7562,130F9B6DCCF9,"because the rules and expectations act as a rubric for students to follow, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+82aea3d0ef7d,130F9B6DCCF9,as well as making sure the project is acceptable to the teachers requirements. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a99718f28f4,130F9B6DCCF9,"On social media there are examples of students who have found a loophole in the directions in order to do less work. For example there is this one person who had to write an essay, topic is unknown. There was one rule that was not clearly stated, that being the font and size, the student used that missing rule to their advantage and used a font made up of shapes, something unreadable. As a student I know that students tend to find a way out of work, setting expectations will give students less of a chance to get out of work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e4c33d450929,130F9B6DCCF9,Giving student guidelines are very helpful in getting the project done. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f2266119435,130F9B6DCCF9,"In my experience not all the projects I have gotten have all the guidelines. This leaves me stuck. The guidelines help me determine what material I need to research and how much of it. Sometimes it might even be that I dont know what kind of product I am making to convey that said research. This not only provides lack of a acceptable project but also not giving good guidelines gives unwanted stress towards the student. For example some students I know worry that their project is not good enough to meet the expectations of the teacher, or that they are not doing the work that is wanted. Giving guidelines will provide less stress for the student and with that a better outcome with their project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aad08f0e94af,130F9B6DCCF9,Most classes follow a curriculum schedule that the teacher need to follow. Without the teacher giving the project the student might not learn the things required or not learn enough for the curriculum. When I had an online class my online teacher was very good. She provided me with enough guidelines that I was able to learn the material needed for me to pass the class. Having the teacher design the project will make sure that the student learns the material required for the curriculum. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+086e709d55da,130F9B6DCCF9,"With a teacher-designed project the rules and expectations act as a rubric for students to follow, as well as making sure the project is acceptable to the teachers requirements. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+541ded402c7d,130F9B6DCCF9,"If the project was to be designed by the students, there are too many easy ways out. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5249282ce242,130F9B6DCCF9,Students can not give themselves the material needed to pass and some students could give themselves projects that are under the expected requirements of the teacher. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+511962ff40a5,130F9B6DCCF9,Having a teacher design the project gives the teacher the ability to assure the student is learning what is expected of them. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+88e0752c81a4,1313ADFE62C6,"If my principal ever decided to make students participate in an extracurricular activity, I would agree with their decision. Joining certain extracurricular activities can bring many benefits to students' lives and open up more opportunities for them in the future. Think about all the things you could learn through extracurricular activities. ",Position,Effective,,,
+da67b9f23d5f,1313ADFE62C6,"Extracurricular activities can help students with things like building new and helpful experiences, preparing for the future ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8515a22bf4a,1313ADFE62C6,discovering more about their interests ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+93e001249d11,1313ADFE62C6,socializing with their peers. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+de7ca99c4f16,1313ADFE62C6,Joining a certain group for an extracurricular activity can help you make experiences that can open up different pathways for you in the future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8da285895dd2,1313ADFE62C6,"If you ever wanted to pursue a career in a certain field, extracurricular activities that you participate in now can help you prepare for what those might be. For example, if you wanted to pursue a career in a job like graphic design, it could be helpful to join an art club or even yearbook club. When you join clubs like these, they help you build certain strengths in areas that your preferred career specializes in. Yearbook club, for example, allows you to design a cover for the school yearbook, which would in turn give you the experience of designing covers. A poll performed by Oxford University has showed that 76% of people who now have jobs in the art field participated in some kind of extracurricular activity at school when they were students to help them learn more about what their future jobs would be like. It can also be helpful to build experiences for things like college. Many colleges and universities today look at not only students' grades, but also what things they participated in outside of the classroom. The more activities that you participate in both inside and outside of school, the more qualified you are to go to certain colleges because of your strengths. It helps prepare you for different paths in the future. Participating in extracurricular activities such as clubs and teams can not only help you build experiences for the future, but it can also help you discover what you're passionate about. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0f1154d8389d,1313ADFE62C6,"If you decided to join in on an activity that you can participate in as an extracurricular, it might help you discover what you enjoy doing ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+690b7dc91200,1313ADFE62C6," At first when you decide to participate activities such as school clubs, you may be hesitant because you don't know if you will enjoy what you're going to do there, but your ideas might change after spending time there. If there was a rule saying that students did have to participate in an extracurricular activity, some students might feel as though they are being forced and won't enjoy their time participating in it. However, a lot of students' viewpoints may change over time and they grow to love the activity that they're doing. These kinds of activities can help students discover more about how they like spending their time. A poll performed on Harvard University students showed that 84% of students didn't know what they wanted to major in before joining an extracurricular activity in either middle school or high school. A similar experiment performed by Generic_School showed that, when the principal decided all students must participate in an extracurricular activity, 92% of students enjoyed the activity that they participated in throughout the school year. It also showed that 65% of those students decided to continue that extracurricular activity the following year because they liked doing it. Schools offer many different kinds of activities to participate in, and they can help you discover both your passions and hobbies. When you discover what your passionate about in a certain activity, it also gives you the opportunity to socialize with peers participating in the same activity that might be interested in the same things you are. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4c497187256c,1313ADFE62C6,"Participating in things like clubs, sports teams, or student council gives students the opportunity to meet new people and branch out. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9232f6e67db,1313ADFE62C6,"When you join an extracurricular activity, you're put in situations where you must work with and cooperate with others. This type of interaction gives students the chance to meet and connect with new people. Most activities like these use team efforts. For example, activities like Science Olympiad require you to collaborate with others in order to win competitions, it helps you both get along with others and develop teamwork skills. Overall, this can help with your future in situations where you work alongside co-workers. You can even make close friends through extracurricular activities. The students there most likely will share similar interests because they are all participating in an activity that focuses on a certain field that they probably enjoy. Sports teams, for example, give people opportunities to work with others who are very passionate about the same sport that they are. Teammates have to cooperate with each other and work together in order to accomplish tasks. This is similar to most other extracurricular activities, they can help you form bonds with your peers that can last a lifetime. This chance to socialize with others is only one of the reasons I would agree with the prinicpal's decision to make students participate in extracurriculars ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f8dee9cd389f,1313ADFE62C6,"For the reasons that I have provided as well as other ways that extracurricular activities can be beneficial, it's encouraged that more students participate in extracurricular activities. There are clearly many ways that it would help improve students' lives. It can help them with their passions, socializing with people who share interests or views, and can help students with making new experiences to assist them in the future. Many schools offer a variety of different activities to join that many of the students already find to be enjoyable. Because of the points made, if my principal ever decided that all students had to participate in at least one extracurricular activity, I would agree with her decision. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03b34115e0df,131614E5C301,"Cars have always been apart of American culture. From the ""...birth place of the Model T; the home of Detroit; the place where Wilson Pickett immortalized ""'Mustang Sally'""(The End of Car Culture, Rosenthal) Cars and automobils have impacted our everyday lifes from going to the store to hanging out with friends, but car usage has been stedily decreesing and for all the right reasons. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b9f1d36fb9a4,131614E5C301,"A new movemnent is trending everywhere, it's called ""smart planning"". It's simple, separate subarban life from auto use. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a1851e4a1b9f,131614E5C301,In doing so this movement is going to help out the econdomy and also the enviorment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a264f1527589,131614E5C301,"The infamous smog is not only in Bejing, or the United States, but also in The City of Love. ""Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals...[Last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London..."" (Paragraph 17, Duffer) The city is not so lovely as you'd think it would be, but the trend has cought on in Paris! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e00a3650fad7,131614E5C301,Not only that but it also has been great for the enviorment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26817cd0f9ff,131614E5C301,"Most people would think ""I could never do that! No one could live like that and still make a living!"" Honestly though, it's been doing the city of Bogota in Colombia, a city comprimised of 7 million citizens a favor. They held a event for only one day evey year since the mid 1990s to improve and ""...promote alternive transportation and reduce smog."" (Paragraph 21, Selsky) Doing this has sparked a revolution of change thoughout the whole city. More people are willing to walk insted of drive to help the enviorment and the place they live in, and the city is giving right back to them! ""Parks and sports centers have also bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut trafic; and new restaruants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up."" (Paragraph 28, Selsky) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8e2ff868c174,131614E5C301,"Just one day a week could cut down smog and other green house gasses a lot and help our enviroment and the edodomey. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+a61cbe935117,131614E5C301,"Back in the 1950's people had to use cars to do eveything. From talking to a friend face to face to going to the nearest resturant. But now you can do all of that in your own living room, due to technology that has advanced us to be able to use Facetime, Skype, or Oovoo to talk to our friends face to face using out phone, tablet, or personal computer. And to drive anywhere we need to we have apps the diliver taxies to our houses for us.""...the Internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends...Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps have facilitated more flexiable commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared can services fro getting to work."" ( Paragraph 35, Rosenthal)
+
+Working everyday will effect this because no one wants to miss work. Missing work means less money and creates more stress for the person missing work. By saving maybe $10 on gas that day you're missing out on the $125 you could've made by working, but there's another solution to this also. Car-pool! Even if you're driving the car yourself or you're in the car you're saving fule and money. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ebb296446b0a,131614E5C301,you could to this to stop in increes of smog in our enviorment and even help with traffic jams. And without traffic jams eveyone is less stressed out and a lot more happier. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+973fced8f286,131614E5C301,"By not using our cars as much, we can help ourselves and everyone aroud us by making a better world that makes it better for our children, or even our childrens' children. ",Position,Effective,,,
+3b684df232bf,131614E5C301,"We can save money by just taking one day off of not driving. We should limit car use so we can stop car accedents from happening, getting stressed in traffic jams, to helping out the economical heart of the United States, and just to make our world a better place to have fun and thrive in.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+88c9fb0a5101,13326EED1708,"Yes I agree that Venus is dangerous place, but scientists are trying to find ways to dicover and learn more about Venus. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a1936cd541a2,13326EED1708,"Many years ago scientist believed that Venus use to have Oceans and Valleys. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c148292b1b70,13326EED1708,"Venus could be visted by explores but the tempature condtions is too hot for humans. Spacecraft have landed on Venus and they lasted a few hours every since then no one have been back since 3 decades. Also Venus has a very thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. In paragraph 3 it says ""90 times greater than what we experience of Earth"" This qoute shows that Venus is a very hot plave to live on and that humans will never be able to live there. Venus have the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our Sun ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cae32a9edc44,13326EED1708,So this shows that Venus is a very hot planet that humans can not live on because of the conditions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+93e10b572c2c,13326EED1708,"
+In Conclusion scientist, spacecraft and the NASA are still trying to see what they can do about traveling to Venus but no one has not beem back since then. This shows that Venus tempature and atmospehere is too bad to live in. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c5b5cfc20531,135D6AEDDA9F,"Twenty five years ago something strange happened on mars. People may have heard about ""The Face on Mars"" and thinked that it was formed by alien life. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e3dc79d38739,135D6AEDDA9F,Scientists believed the face was an alien artifact . It actually was not. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1c1989325db0,135D6AEDDA9F,Scientists from NASA say that it was either a butte or mesa-landforms common in the american west. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa0c5b6d11d3,135D6AEDDA9F,"This subject today is still a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film , appeared in books and magazines , radio talk shows and it even haunted grocery stores checkout lines for 25 years. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+527e76dba6e4,135D6AEDDA9F,"After that , everyone was not satisfied. The face on mars is located at 41 degrees north and was winter in april 1998 - a cloudy time of year. The camera had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43718f0bbb52,135D6AEDDA9F,"People say it is not a a natural landform , they think it was from alien matter ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f214e080f800,135D6AEDDA9F,wich is not true because ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+309d92287e2c,135D6AEDDA9F,NASA explained in the article that it was just a Martian mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+670f07879dd0,135D6AEDDA9F,"It was common around Cyodonia. So once the scientists sent pictures to us ,over time you can see the ""face"" fades out over time. This means that it did have formed shadows giving illusions of the eyes , mouth , and nose. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c475e64d6a37,135D6AEDDA9F,To conclude it was not a face-- it was a Mesa.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e08324983079,13C74967CE1B,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author gives us reasons why exploring Venus would be very difficult. But, at the same time, the author gives us reasons why it's important to explore Venus. It's because Venus is Earth like, and so we might be able to visit it one day. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3fd72cd25cc5,13C74967CE1B,"The article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" states, ""Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally rhe losest in distance too"" This is very important, it means that because that Venus is Earth like, as well as the closest planet to earth at times, its important to learn about it, in case we need to go to it at anytime. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfc47004659a,13C74967CE1B,"At the end, the artivle also states, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meed the very edges on imagination and innovation."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8fb76e828119,13C74967CE1B,"This means that even though it's dangerouse to go to Venus, we shouldn't help us hold it back, space is a very dangerous place, and if we let us hold us back, we won't get anywhere, and Fast. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3f076a5b1e71,13E8EE063566,"Did you know that there are car-free cities? In the German suburbs, life goes on without cars and vehicles to use as transportataion. In the outskirts of Freiburg, a lot of things that envolve car use are forbidden. Driving in Paris is also banned because of smog. In Bogoto, Columbia, they decided to spead the Day Without Cars to local countries.
+
+Near the French and Swiss borders, on the outskirts of Freiburg, street parking, driveways, and home garages are forbidden in the new district. On Vauban's streets, it is almost a car-free area. The only vehicle on the streets is the tram that travels to downtown Freiburg and few streets on one edge on the community. It's not like the whole idea of cars are forbidden. People are allowed to own cars but, there are only two places to park. ""They are allowed to park in large garages at the end of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home"", paragraph 2 states. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5fddb9b5ca1,13E8EE063566,Because of the air pollution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+771ef5b0ee6f,13E8EE063566,"Paris set up a partial driving ban to clear the air. On Monday, drivers with a even-numbered license plate have to leave their cars at home or pay a 22-euro fine, which is ($31). Close to 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their cars impounded, due to the reaction of the fine. The good thing about it is, after the change was put into action, congestion went down 60% in the capital of France after 5 days of intensifying the smog. The idea worked perfectly fine and ended up making a great change in France and helped the environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c6150764960,13E8EE063566,"During a car-free day in Bogota, Columbia, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, and took buses to work. The purpose of this action was to control pollution and avoid traffic jams. The Day Without Cars was so effective that, it began spreading to other countires. The turnout was large, people didn't even care about the weather. There were just a bunch of people working together for a good cause. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29f8ee914ab0,13E8EE063566,The outcome took away a lot of stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee62f1bb4a1b,13E8EE063566,"Although, cars are used very often and are a useful form of transportation, they are also very hamful. Taking a break from driving isn't a bad idea. ",Position,Effective,,,
+4d3df3a4b145,13E8EE063566,"Maybe the people in Florida should consider taking action and having our own care-free day. It wouldn't hurt! If anything, i'll help!    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+72a0e6a927f6,1449A333A335,"The summer is a time for students to enjoy a break from schoolwork. Most students spend their time on vacation or relaxing. Summer projects may impede on students' time to relax, and they may take away their freedom. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+94d64543ccc9,1449A333A335,"It is the students' break, so they may want to decide what projects they have to do. Summer projects should be student-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+a34153be599b,1449A333A335,it allows the students to do projects they are interested in ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3a45266c6771,1449A333A335,that work with their summer schedule. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+84570ac43f6d,1449A333A335,Student-designed projects will interest students more than teacher-designed projects. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f4a4ca335730,1449A333A335,"Many students don't want to do anything school related over the summer. By assigning them projects, they have to take time to do something they don't want to do. However, if the projects were student-designed, they would be more likely to complete them since they designed them themselves. These projects would make the students use their creativity, which would lead to more of them expressing their interests. They will be much more motivated to do a project that interests them than a project made and given to them by a teacher. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4019dd25a5aa,1449A333A335,"Many students travel and have plans over the summer. Consequently, they may not have time to do teacher-designed projects. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95333eb4dce1,1449A333A335,"If the students designed their own projects, they would be able to design them to fit their schedule. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7927ae3e8bb6,1449A333A335,"With this flexibility, students will stress less about finding time for the project. Therefor, students will produce better projects because they aren't stressed. This flexibility allows students to do their best and get the most out of doing school work in the summer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+118f0e16923f,1449A333A335,Many people think that the freedom of student-designed projects will allow students to be lazy and off topic ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7701c03ff7d3,1449A333A335,"However, this freedom gives the students the opportunity to turn schoolwork into something that interests them, thus motivating them to do well. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1d3f37bb9bf1,1449A333A335,"The summer is a break for students to relax and not worry about school. School projects take away from that, but the student-designed projects give more flexibility than those made by teachers. Therefor, summer projects should be student-designed in order to grab students' interest and not impede on their break. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+460711c064a1,144FB09B0949,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author supports the idea of studying Venus through research and data that has been collected thoughout the years. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d0fb46a6c21f,144FB09B0949,The author made really good points about why we should study Venus despite the dangers that it may hold. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b929e31c914,144FB09B0949,"The author talked about why Venus is worth studying.
+
+It is said in paragraph 4, that Venus, long ago, may have been earth-like.
+
+It may have been covered in oceans and supported life.
+
+This is defintely interesting to think about.
+
+If it was like that long ago, why couldn't Venus be inhabitable for humans now?
+
+On Venus, we would have enough solar power, and radiation levels wouldn't exceed Earth's.
+
+I think it would be fascinating to study venus even with the dangers that it may present. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da262c1f0d95,144FB09B0949,"Overall, the author did a good job at persuading people to want to study Venus despite the challenges that may be faced.
+
+There was a plentiful amount of interesting facts that the average person may have not knew. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+01be42e83aad,144FB09B0949,"After reading this article, I am not fascinated by Venus and what the future intails for us humans.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4f4c5b9f7433,1463D1D9EC8F,Everyone has a hobby or something they enjoy doing at home why not just do it at school with your friends. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d11823257a13,1463D1D9EC8F,I agree with the principal for making everyone stay after school for a extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2242ad97ec40,1463D1D9EC8F,"because you would stay active by playing sports and running around, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2beecd3d687,1463D1D9EC8F,"you meet new people and friends by staying after with all the kids from your school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+047e92489a05,1463D1D9EC8F,you have fun with playing with you friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2b7e839e871,1463D1D9EC8F,"I love staying after school for night hawk which is are after school program we play basketball on Tuesdays and Thursdays. Its a lot of fun when the teachers join and play with us and we have a big game. We are staying healthy by running around and jumping up and down, bringing up are hart rate and sweating. This is why I think the principal should make everyone stay after school for a extracurricular ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff8f8f41b250,1463D1D9EC8F,"When you stayed after everyday for weather its a club,sport or another activity there will be other kids, some might be your friend but some you might not know. If they are doing the same after school activity you must have some things in common like why your in the same activity so its a easy way to meet new people and friends. This is why I think the principal should make everyone stay after school for a extracurricular activity. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc22b4d09e43,1463D1D9EC8F,"The after school program is pretty fun because of the verity of activities like sports, dance teams, clubs and more. My friends and I like the sports after school because there is soccer and basketball the more kids that stay after the more fun it is because we can have bigger games. This is why I think the principal should make everyone stay after school for a extracurricular activity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b60d0734cf67,1463D1D9EC8F,"
+I agree with the principal making everyone stay after for a extracurricular activity because I think it would keep you active and healthy, meet new people and friends, and have a lot of fun. There a a big verity of different and fun activities there is probably one just right for you.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e0691c856183,1497D777FE12,"Over the summer, many schools assign projects in order for students to continue working and learning year round. However, It is an incredibly heated debate as to whether teachers or students should design these assignments. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4c1209daa1c7,1497D777FE12,Teachers should design the summer projects rather than students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d1eda2ba19de,1497D777FE12,"they can prepare the students for the upcoming curriculum, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a49a359249b4,1497D777FE12,"introduce their style of teaching, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+df01e7d2d806,1497D777FE12,set expectations for work ethic and quality of work for assignments throughout the year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+53d0547eedfc,1497D777FE12,Some could argue that it is more beneficial for students to design summer projects because students can make them more enjoyable. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9572542f8681,1497D777FE12,"However, this should not be the case because it compromises the whole point of summer assignments. If students were to create them, the content of the assignments would not be as helpful. Summer projects are not necessarily about being enjoyable. Their purpose is to ensure that students do not become to accustomed to doing nothing over the extensive period of wasted time called summer break. They keep students tethered to reality and are reminders that the beginning of school is nigh. They are helpful because they keep students' brains used to learning and working over the summer in order to make the start of the new year less painful. Teachers need to design the summer projects to ensure that the assignments retain their purpose and that they are helpful in keeping students busy over the summer. If a student designed them, they would not be as serious or helpful, and they would lose their purpose. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9085181fe2f7,1497D777FE12,"For example, if there was a summer project for a chemistry class, the teacher would want to develop it so that it relates to the upcoming curriculum and provides a good introduction for the year. So, perhaps the teacher would assign work on the basic topics of chemistry, namely what an atom is and what the parts are, the periodic table, nomenclature, and simple chemical reactions. By doing so, students begin the school year with knowledge that can allow them to grasp the later curriculum with more speed and ease. Summer projects are perfect for setting the foundation for the school year, laying the ground upon which the building of knowledge can rise. Teachers are the only ones who can create the most efficient and effective summer projects to maximize their students success, considering they know the material like the back of their hand and they are the ones who are teaching it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7288ea3d8ae7,1497D777FE12,"It can be a shock, for some students, starting the school year blindly without any hints as to how the teacher is going to relay the curriculum to them. For example, one teacher may enjoy using textbooks to teach the subject, so he or she might assign pages to read or even a problem set for the summer. On the other hand, a teacher may prefer lectures, hands on learning, or visual learning. A summer project could match the teachers style of teaching, providing a proper introduction to the school year. Therefore, only teachers themselves can create a summer project that is successful in reflecting their personal style of teaching. This allows the students to know what to expect when starting the new year, and can lead to more success, more confidence, and less anxiety about staring anew with a teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9ca7fdc00640,1497D777FE12,"Along with a summer assignment, a teacher could attach a rubric, for example, to clearly state what he or she expects out of a student. They can highlight how much effort the class requires, and state that students should put pride and care into all of their assignments throughout the year. If these expectations are not created over the summer, the beginning of the school year could be rough for students if they are not sure about how demanding each assignment is. By the teachers designing the summer projects, they can eliminate any confusion students may have over the summer, resulting in a smoother transition into the school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+15c8679a6f0b,1497D777FE12,"teachers should design summer projects in order to prepare students for the year, introduce themselves and their style of teaching, and set the expectations for the school year. Think about the real purpose of summer assignments: to make sure students are still learning over break, and though summer assignments may not be enjoyable, they are invaluable and indispensable to the school year, so they must be created by teachers in order to assure their effectiveness.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d9e456a4e605,14A542270754,"Some schools require that students complete projects over the summer. In my personal experience, they have all been teacher-designed, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+289b0e2492ec,14A542270754,what if summer projects were mostly student-designed? The more you think about it the more it makes sense. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8642b853a27f,14A542270754,"more interesting and engaging for students, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+452fd0e5d5c1,14A542270754,a compelling scientific foundation for its effects on childrens' learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bd7e38f04edc,14A542270754,"This is mostly due to the fact that students can choose the things that better relate to their interests. They become interested in both the project and the relevant part of the curriculum. Applying the information you learned in previous school year is an excellent way to test what you've learned - and applying it to something you genuinely care about is the best test of your understanding. Also, people must be interested in a project before they can be enthusiastic (or willing at the least) to engage with the it, and everyone knows that engagement is a good thing for learning. Students incorporating something into their break makes them even more likely to do it, a fact that has had especially important bearing for me this last year, where it's been challenging to stay on top of the workload. The few times I've taken some days off to relax, I noticed that it was comparatively really difficult to get myself to do stuff when starting again. I feel even more apprehensive if I get out of the habit entirely. It's simple: when you give a student a break, they're more likely to engage in school projects if they feels like a part of their break, so not only does letting students design their own projects provide quality, but quantity. Here's an example which fits perfectly with what I'm saying: I walked into my History of the Americas class at the beginning of the year, and many of my peers who were top students had not finished reading the books they were assigned during the summer and fudged the details on the accompanying paper. When listening to them, the most common remarks were about how dry and uninteresting the prescribed book list was and how having to do it in the summer was an annoyance that they just wanted to put off. Meanwhile, most student-designed projects I know of provide much better learning and motivation. The biggest example I've in my mind when writing this is my experience with the I'm in the IB program, where students are required to complete an
+
+Extended Essay, a 16 - 20 page paper on a subject of your choice. Because I can do mine on the physics and mathematics of a diabolo (similar to a yo-yo), and I spend a lot of my free time invested in this object anyway, I've never looked forwards to a project so much in my life (not to mention I love math and problem solving)! I started last summer by doing some experiments, and have since been leaning towards the math side to discover new math (like the calculus in a Lagrangian) and push myself, actually using what I've learned in school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+634847442ae2,14A542270754,The opportunity for involvement and motivation offered by student-designed projects (especially during the summer) is great enough that I believe it would be worth it for teachers to adopt in place of more traditional assignments. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+119d4b07bd9a,14A542270754,"Some people say summer projects have to support the student for the rigor of the following school year, and that student designed projects will not demand the same skills needed to prepare them for the next year. Therefore, teachers instead of students should make summer assignments ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a421b2e97543,14A542270754,"But to the contrary, a large body of evidence supports that with minimal guidance from the teacher over the summer, taking longer breaks from hard and tiresome work isn't that detrimental for your learning. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e2f9324b0979,14A542270754,"While I realize that student-designed projects may fall short in providing the work ethic needed for the following year, I don't think that's the point of summer work. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3b4eae67823c,14A542270754,"The point is that you take a long break to refresh you for the next year so you don't burnout (e. g. senioritis). Furthermore, most people figure out how to keep up with the workload by the end of the following year anyways. And, even if students make it slightly easier, it is still reflective the curriculum - and in the long run it's that knowledge that matters, especially later in life. Likewise, if students can put it off for a month or so, that isn't really a bad thing. Spacing, or leaving what learning and then coming back to it right when you're almost forgetting it, is one of the most scientifically backed learning techniques we know of. In one study, students were asked to memorize words in Spanish, but split into multiple groups. As compared to the control of 8 hours of straight studying, the group that studied four hours, then four hours an entire month later, did over twice as well on a test of that vocabulary after the study. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+92639d48a094,14A542270754,"Because of the clear benefits of avoiding burnout and spacing, it's best if students take advantage of the freedom how they feel, so long as they engage with something ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a4d71621139c,14A542270754,"Student-designed projects that can spark student's creativity also help teachers, since it's much easier and safer for them just to let a student create it themselves. Sure, there is a chance the teacher might get it right, but it's not guaranteed. And finally, there's nothing to lose. Yes, kids might cram it in the week before break ends, but remember that most kids already do that. It's fair to say that student-designed projects are a win for learning, creativity, teachers, and students alike that we're missing out on.
+
+Student-designed projects both prepare students better for the next year while helping them consolidate what they've learned previously better than most teacher made assignment ever could, with few exceptions. So, while I don't think that student-designed projects are the key to perfect learning, but they are definitely a part of it.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5ccfa9ecbd7d,14B366E0D9CA,"Think about walking into your second period class and you have a test. This is a test that you have to pass but you have no clue what the test is going to be over. You sit down and your heart starts pounding so fast that you feel sick to your stomach. You're so scared to take this test because your not sure if you're going to pass it or not. ""You make begin"", your teacher says. Reading a few questions in your head and you dont know any of the answers. Have you ever thought about technology being able to help you? Should technology be able to read students emontional expressions? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e8986d30c9cb,14B366E0D9CA,The Facial Action Coding System is a 3D computer model of the face. It uses your facial muscles to determand how your feeling. For example if you are feeling anger the computer would know because your orbicularis oris tightens your lips to show the anger. This device would be able to be showed by a real face or even a painting like the Mona Lisa. This computer can even show mixed emotions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9364c35f7263,14B366E0D9CA,"Technology is a valuable resource for students. The new technology called the ""Facial Actions Coding System"" would be great for students. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8211d75967ef,14B366E0D9CA,"This is something that will be able to read your face and let people know if your bored, tired, happy, sad, and it even shows your fears. If your stuggling on a test or an assignment it will give you help and walk you through some of the problems. This would help many students understand the concept and test scores would be so much higher. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9bb934910140,14B366E0D9CA,According to the article people are able to tell if you are having a bad day. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+03c1631e4b75,14B366E0D9CA,"People can not tell what is wrong with you just because you look sad or upset. Vinci studied human anatomy to help paint facial muscles that can convey certain emotions. If you look at the painting of Mona Lisa you would be able to tell from her facial strututres of what type of mood she is trying to show. When looking at the Mona Lisa , it really intended to make you smile and in a happy mood. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e9b4637c93c,14B366E0D9CA,The FACS would benfit alot of students in the world. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ada4d3f8fe9e,14FE56852B95,"Do you think this would be a good idea? In the reading Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D'Alto, Mona Lisa is mostly happy a little disgusted and a little fearful and a little angry this is about mixed emotions and coming up with a new technology about reading yoiur emotions and calculating them for you to see whos really happy or faking happiness. This is about calculating emotions on a three D computer. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0c8d2cec6df8,14FE56852B95,"First off, Mona Lisa is mostly always happy and she wanted to come up with a way to see if a lot of school students are happy or just faking there happiniss and hiding there real emotions. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+35b75e38c39e,14FE56852B95,"there is this three D computer that can take calculations on your emotions and tell you if you are truly happy or hiding your real emotions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e93f2a007f74,14FE56852B95,"secendly, theres ba computer that contructs a three-D model of the face and all 44 major muscles in the model must move around like the human muscles. there are six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness the three-D computer can detect all six of these emotions and calculate the emotions and tell you how you really feel. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65674f84f35b,14FE56852B95,you can tell when someone is truly smiling because there muscles in there face move a serten way and if it is a fake smile your muscles move a different way therefore you can tell if the smile is fake or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55e340049e83,14FE56852B95,"Therefore, yes i think this new technology would work because the three-D model can detect the true feelings you have and calculate it ",Position,Adequate,,,
+97e79cb8892e,14FE56852B95,i think you shoukd try this if you ever get a chance. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+93daab2cccb6,151F9011BF04,"Venus, otherwise known as the ""Evening Star,"" is one of the more challenging planets to examine closely in our solar system. While this plant is often called Earth's twin, it is vastly different in terms of environment and hospitability. Despite being the closest planet to Earth at times, no spaceship has touched down on Venus in over thirty years. The dangers presented by Venus are many, but the author greatly supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite these dangers. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+09116a76686d,151F9011BF04,The author supports this claim by stating that the insight to be gained is significant and by offering methods for obtaining these insights despite the danger that is readily appearant. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a0b1dcf80174,151F9011BF04,Venus is one of the most challenging planets to examine due to its very extreme environment ,Claim,Effective,,,
+245a1d5c653a,151F9011BF04,"Paragraph 3 of the article is all about the extreme environment that Venus presents. Venus has temperatures over 800 degress Fahrenheit, an atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than that on Earth, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and other obstacles that prove challenging for scientists to overcome. Additionally, Venus has clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere which prove to be challenging to scientists. These dangers may seem impossible to overcome, but scientists have been developing new methods to further their knowledge of Venus. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cd81d474dd25,151F9011BF04,NASA is one organization that has been developing particularly interesting ideas about how to further study Venus. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ce075e40ddaa,151F9011BF04,"They are considering a blimp-like vehicle that would float above the suface of Venus to meet the challenges presented. This blimp would avoid the poor conditions of the Venusian landscape by floating some thirty miles above the surface. Conditions around the blimp would still be slightly hot, but the pressure and toxicity would be similar to that on Earth. These conditions are not ideal, but they would be sufficient enough to study Venus further. Another one of NASA's ideas is to use mechanical computers to study Venus. These mechanical computers do not require electronics, and they would be more resistant to the poor conditions of the surface. These new innovations in the study of Venus is what makes the dangers tolerable and the study worthy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+01a3094587cc,151F9011BF04,"According to the article, astronomers are interested in Venus because it was likely the most Earth-like planet in the solar system at one point. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+862ca28001d4,151F9011BF04,"Venus used to be covered in oceans and supported life. Additionally, Venus still has features that are similar to Earth's such as a rocky sediment with valleys, mountains, and craters. Insight into the Venusian landscape would further allow astronomers to determine how closely related Earth and Venus were. The author also states that humans should not be limited by their fear to go out and explore. In the final paragraph of the article, the author describes how human curiosity will lead humans into many intimidating expidentures. However, the author believes that travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited simply due to danger, and humans should travel as far as their innovation will take them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1f97d2539040,151F9011BF04,"The author of this article supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by stating the insight to be gained from further exploring Venus and by presenting new methods that are making new insights possible. The danger of Venus is extensive due to the high temperatures, extreme atmospheric pressure, and wild weather patterns. These obstacles are being dealt with though by new ideas from scientists at NASA. One big idea from NASA is the idea to use a blimp to observe Venus from above the surface. Another idea of theirs is to use materials that would be able to withstand the extreme conditions of the Venusian environment. All this is in the hopes that futher insight will be made on the planet that once was the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8eb4bc7e2f34,1541D4F15A1B,"First, how does this new technology work ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b1ea14a7d002,1541D4F15A1B,the values it has in the schools ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+698978a1f783,1541D4F15A1B,it can make it easier detect someones emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a255613746c,1541D4F15A1B,This is why technology that reads emotions can be very useful ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4cd0f3d67447,1541D4F15A1B,"First, how would the new technology detect the emotions? The Facial Action Coding System is how ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+60397ce81807,1541D4F15A1B,"This innovation was created by Dr. Paul Eckman. The process starts with the computer constructing 3-D model of faces. It also, models the 44 major muscles that have to move like humans. By using video imagery, the software tracks the facial movement to recognize the emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+881925683d10,1541D4F15A1B,"Second, the effects it has on the school could be outstanding. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f13413c4513,1541D4F15A1B,"What if the school computers could tell a student's emotions? The computer could recognize if the student is bored or confused. The computer could modify what the student is learning to something more effective. This way would be easier on the teacher, so they won't have to come up with new lesson plans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a3d34275ab5,1541D4F15A1B,"
+Third, it can easily detect someones emotions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cb7ba0ba349,1541D4F15A1B,"They have used the new technology on Leonardo da Vinci panting of Mona Lisa. In the painting it's kind of hard to tell her emotions. The new technology find she's 83%, happy 9% disguted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. If this technology can detect a painting emotions like this easily, just imagine how easy it would be to detect on a human. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b155550a59e1,1541D4F15A1B,"
+In Conclusion, technology that reads emotions can be very useful. First, how it's uesd. second, the value it has in schools. Third,it can make it easier to detect someones emotion. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bee18f37c961,155ADE36AE80,Persuading a person involves tons of effort and time. You have to know your facts and have tons of background knowlege on the subject. Do you personally believe in aliens? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+637428649c30,155ADE36AE80,"The so called ""face"" provided in the image is what I believe a natural landform, although some peoples thoughts differ ",Position,Adequate,,,
+125c4863041b,155ADE36AE80,If you look at the image that was revealed by NASA you will see there are no realistic features to it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c899f0395728,155ADE36AE80,"Do you ever come across a person with a square or retangular head? Well, I have not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d0ef84227da,155ADE36AE80,Aliens aren't realistic ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e83b8c01c29,155ADE36AE80,"The presents of aliens are said to be there, but realisitcally have you ever personally came across a alien or even evidence to a aliens presents? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec6838da4b16,155ADE36AE80,"As we come to unmask the face on Mars the gravitational pull has formed the ""face"" on Mars by waste build up. Aliens are fictional creatures that live in movies and tv shows, not in the real world. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d0247705c7ee,15810FF4CB38,"Do you agree or disagree having technology read to students emotional expressions?
+
+Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accurancy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding
+
+System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7b60ceb389e8,15810FF4CB38,I personality will like to have technology to read my emotional expressions . it would be fun to have that in school . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+33f4e6bbd060,15810FF4CB38,It shows just how much this computer can do. Imagine a computer that knows when your're happy or sad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30aab6bd714e,15810FF4CB38,"''The same technology can make computer- animated faces more expressive - for video games or video surgery'' said Dr,Huang.
+
+Dr. Huang and his colleague experts are developing better ways for humans and computer to communicate. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscules. It haves Six basic emotions - happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associasted each with characterisctic movments of the facial muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6412caa8de03,15810FF4CB38,This is how it works It's all about those muscular action units. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0d2e52fb73d,15810FF4CB38,"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smlie and a forced one. In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles taht begin at your cheek bones) lift the corner of your mouth. (That's our instruction #1.) Muscles are called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes.(That's instruction #2.) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cbe62be10453,15810FF4CB38,"I agree that students should have this Facial Action Coding System in schools. Not only well it help by reading emotions but it may also help for students that want to be actors and people that like doing art and like painting faces. Dr. Huang and his colleague are very smart for making
+
+The Facial Action Coding System for school.                    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7959c42b1d2,15A4F9A6C915,The Author supports this idea because he or she says Venus is too dangerous for astronuts to go to and study. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a66d4303d2fb,15A4F9A6C915,"So The author says that NASA is working on a Robot, to send into Space, to Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6c331dd8814,15A4F9A6C915,Nasa is doing this so They don't have to got on Venus in person instead they are using a robot to gather information baout Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+295bf8aedbee,15A4F9A6C915,The Author Also says that since venus is very dangerous ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a961303c80bd,15A4F9A6C915,the Robot can study the plant while the astromistes stay on earth and they can egt data about venus thanks to the Robot. The Author says that NASA is always inventing new ways to get information from space and plants without doing it in person. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ffffb3b11d6c,15A4F9A6C915,I fell like the author is correct about these staements because Space and the other plants are not safe for humans to even step foot on. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a7920cadc969,15A4F9A6C915,"When the Author says that technolgy will be your best friends for ching out space and the other plants and get information for you the auther is correct. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f7f276fd88f,15A4F9A6C915,"Sometimes something happens like sometime their computer act up or they need to be replaced so sometimes they are not reciving information from the robots and it makes it very diffcault to see what is happing in Space, and what is happing on the Plants. So sometimes the astronuts would have to go into space and retreve the robots themselfs and bring them back to earth so they can fix them if the robot is broken ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a8382220949c,15C47E28278D,The technology that is being deveolped is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb68e7e6110f,15C47E28278D,because in situations wehn someone doesnt want to talk or refuse to in a crisis they can read ther emotions and seek a better way of talking with them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1abe33355a5,15C47E28278D,also a lot of schools do a horrible almost a illegal jobs and reading kids emotions and helping there students ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b426111f23b,15C47E28278D,if this technology was used in schools teachers might actually have a chance at doing there jobs which they need to get better soon. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5717b54c754e,15C47E28278D,this topic is useful in a lot of ways hostage situations interagations helping disabled people in schools which we all know need help this program could do wonders for people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+396ad83f3dc6,15C47E28278D,but if they use it to much and make it to logical we could lose sight of how to properly use it ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3cdaa4b6ee95,15C47E28278D,to many rules treating to many people the same would destory it because everyones different even if they feel the same way as other people some have a chip on ther shoulder and others own the world to many differences to make this system properly work and functio in a way we all wish it could but it would be to complex and overcompilcated might be a fun app on your phone but not for statewide adminastraion use it would be corrupt and wrong it would only be used to hurt not help ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d81d472f41d,15DF5443F192,Citizens cars are good to have but all the fines and stress they are putting on us makes us not wont to buy a car. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+1421991d80c5,15DF5443F192,But now i see we need to have a change and just start walking and finding another way other then our cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+04276f8d7399,15DF5443F192,they are talking about fining and impounding our cars the ones (Cars) we paid full cash for. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fd045b4db935,15DF5443F192,"accroding to the article in ''Life Goes On Without Cars'', u could park at a garage but its gotta be ownship and u would have to buy space that cost $40,000, along with a home. For example, u would have to buy a house pay for that rent and also pay for the parking fee that u brought with the house. So with that being said u should just buy a house, and not own a car and just walk, ride a bike ,or take a bus to where every u got to go.
+
+Secondly, now there saying in article ''Driving due to smog'' On Monday motorists with-numbered licence plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine($31).The same would apply to odd-numbered plated the following the day. That's not right because you brought your  car, but you could only drive it a certain day (would ever the law says). The understanding that I'm getting is you got to follow the law rules when ever that applies to the goverment people, which is understandable. But my point is I brought my car and i should be able to drive my car when ever I feel like it.
+
+Futher more, Now they  want to have a ''Car Free Day'' In the article Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, they say millions of Colombins hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during a car-free yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. For example, If the people did drive on a car-free day they would face $25 fine. So if it rained and u needed to get somewhere you could't drive u would have to take a bus, walk, train, or skate. Or you would be fined. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e97b99d87993,15DF5443F192,"from the understanding that I'm getting,  I advise everyone to take the bus,walk,skate,bike,or hike just to get to where you got to be also you could just not own a car. Because either way, if u break the rules you are going to be to be fine or  they could impounded your car and thats would be a lot of mess  becasue you paid for a car but u gotta pay the fine and pay to get your car out the impounded. So EVERYONE just walk,bike,hike,skate,or take a train or bus.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7be5d9bc7345,15E106AF20A7,"Have you ever wondered about Venus? This planet is somthing that we as humans haven't figured out yet. We are facing the challenge of Venus, it is really valued not only because of the facts and information we get out of this planet. Instead, humans are curiose and looking for more evidence of what we are going to face in the futur ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+63930cc58cbc,15E106AF20A7,"We should learn more not only on the outter shell, but more deeply in the inside. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fdb01b81df09,15E106AF20A7,"Venus is the second planet in the our solar system(Milkyway). Also ot is one of the brightest points in the sky at night. As the closest plant to Earth in terms of size, density, and distane. The surface of it is full with valleys, mountains, and craters. Not even one single spacecraft have reached to it before. 97 percent of the atmosphere is carbon dioxide, forming a blanket for the planet. This planet has the highest temperature in the whole entire Milkyway. NASA(National Aeronautics and Space Administration) have not stop sending spacecraft to land on Venus. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c1d4c109e92f,15E106AF20A7,"If we could lend on Venus later on in the generation, could there be any living organisum that lives on that plante? There could be a possible chance since Earth is not the only planet in space. There are more things tha we need to discover. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+dac2148d87e8,15E106AF20A7,You would never know if there are creatures like ous that have a abiliy to explore space. We should keep trying even if there is only a 0.0000001 chance. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+88cf1833cb70,163F5BC5FDF3,There are many advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e6f190f2e08f,163F5BC5FDF3,less smog or pollution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1af62b0f3736,163F5BC5FDF3,stores would be places in walking distance ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a30a526884f5,163F5BC5FDF3,it saves time because there is less traffic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d98b547fe93,163F5BC5FDF3,"it improves safety. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b15a0562207c,163F5BC5FDF3,"In Vauban, Germany, residents of this upscale comunnity are surburban pioneers, going where few soccer moms or commuting executives have ever gone before: they have given up their cars. ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"" said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a329bbaba3d3,163F5BC5FDF3,"Basic precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, with less space for parking. In this new approach, stores are being placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5c666dc83feb,163F5BC5FDF3,"After days of near record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog. The smog rivaled Bejing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.
+
+In Bogota, Columbua, there is a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Columbians hikes, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily deviod of traffic jams. ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,"" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae52f37810a8,163F5BC5FDF3,"President Obama proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which ""pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89c33e7c718f,167F809A194B,"If your tired of your job and looking for a adventure you can come join the
+
+""seagoing cowboys ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d41dc3099b31,167F809A194B,you can help us bath animals ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+df2045fd2439,167F809A194B,send goods to people who need yor help the most. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+154b9e524786,167F809A194B,We have so much fun on the ship ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2fb8723bd41,167F809A194B,"we feed horses,we bath animals, and clean the stalls. But after that we have so much time to play you can play baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, whitting and the games help pass alot of time, since it takes along time to cross the ocean. The ship is just like a cruise but you have to help do some choirs. I had fun on the ship and I think you can to. Being a seagoing cowboy it opened the world to me. I was very grateful for this opportunity. It made aware of people of other countries and their needs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4eee2bf8fe27,167F809A194B,Thats not you can do or see being a seagoing cowboy you can go to other places like greece ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dfedde2cd4e6,167F809A194B,"in greece which i thought was reallt speacial was seeing the Acropolis. I also went to venice Italy, a city with streets of water ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f735afe1b8c1,167F809A194B,I hope you choose to become a seagoing cowboy and help out the people in need.             ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+bd70ee037a64,16B47CE3BEBB,I feel like it should and here's why. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7fc088314355,16B47CE3BEBB,First of all what happen is someone is depress and dont want to tell anyone about it so they kill their self because they're depress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+035e3f2721a5,16B47CE3BEBB,the facial Action Coding System could have help that poor boy or girl because someone would ask her what's wrong and talk about it with him or her and know they feel that someone there for them and how much they're needed and wanted so they don't kill there self matter as fact there are happy right now because someone is there for them and they feel wanted and they can love life agian. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40bbf086a867,16B47CE3BEBB,"My evidence why I wrote that satatment is the passage it said ""she's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful,and 2 percent angry"" I think everyone should have this because it could save a lot of people lives because so many people take their lives away so fast and young because of depresion and lot are teens if high schools and jr high haves these i feel like it would change the world for the better ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae2a5f7ad531,16B47CE3BEBB,Some peolpe don't like it mabye it's because they're the stress ones that need help and think that no one cares and is to scared to show they're depress and they rather keep to them self. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f8787213849d,16B47CE3BEBB,My oppoion is that every school and family doctor should have this to save lives and more. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+64ecf5561020,16EAB34FDC87,"Every summer, millions of students flood from their school buildings, on their way to about 100 straight days away from any form of academia. With the traditional school system having been around for decades, educators and social science researchers alike have longed for a way to strike a balance between learning and leisure during summer vacation. Within just a few moments of deliberation, one will realize that summer projects are a near perfect answer to supplement this lack of learning. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0cc83664dd4e,16EAB34FDC87,"To make most effective use of their time in the summer, kids should conduct student-
+
+designed projects. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7890de100f2b,16EAB34FDC87,"It's through this process that students will become more engaged with the learning material, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5063f82a0163,16EAB34FDC87,"produce higher quality work, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ccb16449c4f3,16EAB34FDC87,begin to store information in their long term memory. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+953671f9bda8,16EAB34FDC87,One of the major gripes students have begun to have with school is undoubtedly the lack a independence as it applies to their learning experience. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b53740d34e6,16EAB34FDC87,"It forces children not only to display their knowledge of course material, but to apply said knowledge in a creative setting that requires a ""bigger picture"" understanding of the given topic. It goes without saying that students will take greater pride in their own work. They'll want to show up on the first day of school with a project that they feel proud to present to their peers. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+afc3da778f27,16EAB34FDC87,"When all the work is theirs, students will feel increasingly inclined to show that they have a full understanding and mastery of the topic. Nobody wants to feel left out, and, especially as kids age and progress higher up through the school system, the way classmates perceive one another becomes all too important. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4986cdb419aa,16EAB34FDC87,"With recent generations of learners displaying less and less focus throughout the years, some might to disprove the effectiveness of student based projects. ""Given full control over the projects parameters,"" one might claim, ""students will become far too focused on obsolete details like font, backgrounds, and pictures."" Someone who might hold this point of view believes a hands-off approach from teachers will only result in lower quality work and declining focus on the course material. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+cc6e5cc9812b,16EAB34FDC87,"However, we can observe time and time again in every day life that critical-thinking tasks can teach skills at an exponentially greater rate. Take an athlete for example, basketball and soccer players will often dribble while counting the number of fingers a partner holds up in front of them. Just like in a school setting, this exercise builds good habits and requires people to apply their newly learned skills in unfamiliar circumstances. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d05e072166a5,16EAB34FDC87,"It's through a plethora of ways that student driven learning can benefit school systems around the world. More effective forms of education during the summer are invaluable in cutting down the amount of start up time at the beginning of any given school year where teachers struggle to prime their students for the year ahead. In place of the traditional project type, designed by teachers and administrators, more free reign forms of summer education produce a more enjoyable learning experience and prompt kids to retain far more knowledge than they would before. Overall, a shift towards more student liberties in this day in age could see monumental benefits for everyone involved in and around modern public schools. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cb0f335fb104,179A2FE8AF05,Thousands of people die every year from people driving and texting. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+87c385980a26,179A2FE8AF05,"Texting and driving should be banned because it puts other people's lives in danger. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+dcb5ed598181,179A2FE8AF05,"If a person crashes his or her car while driving, insurance on their vehicle could go up ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8764dd869dd6,179A2FE8AF05,"A car crash can also kill loved ones, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e36506760446,179A2FE8AF05,people riding with the intention of getting to point A to point B can be dismissed because of a car accident and a careless driver. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fb61537dd6d,179A2FE8AF05,"The main reason why why people text while driving is because they are really addicted to their cellular devices. Careless drivers should not be allowed on the streets because it is very risky to other drivers out there. In a car crash, the person getting hit can be seriously injured or even worse, that person could lose their legs or die ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc3e35945a4e,179A2FE8AF05,The driver that was distracted by texting can also put his or her passengers lives at risk. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77f565fac4af,179A2FE8AF05,"Somebody inside the car could fly out the windshield as soon as the car hits, worse scenario is that there is a probability that the vehicle can catch on fire while the passengers and the driver are inside the vehicle. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef5aa2bd8a10,179A2FE8AF05,"In a vehicle, insurance can be expensive or cheap, but it depends on what kind of insurance the vehicle has. Full coverage is the best one, it can back up anybody that gets in a car accident. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cb0e910b214,179A2FE8AF05,"The liability insurance is good too, but it does not cover that much if a person gets involved in a car accident. So, going with full coverage should be the best choice. Insurance insures your vehicle, driving without insurance is illegal. If a person gets into a car accident, insurance is there to help but if a person was too busy distracted on their phone, the insurance payment will go up. A driver that gets him or herself into an accident and they were very distracted on their phone, there could be some bad consequences. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d09a6007ef96,179A2FE8AF05,Getting into an accident can cause serious problems to the vehicle getting hit ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06a376555fb4,179A2FE8AF05,The vehicle can be totaled which means that the vehicle can no longer be driven ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+63028570ab49,179A2FE8AF05,"If the driver goes too fast and he or she has their family aboard, they could be seriously injured if they crash. Losing someone you love in a car accident can be devastating. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1d47badffe6,179A2FE8AF05,"Most people don't get to sleep right knowing that they killed someone they loved in a car accident due to a distraction on their phone. Some people don't even drive anymore knowing what they did to a loved one. Losing a family member in a car accident is very sad, and very disappointing to the driver. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0acb5f0e496,179A2FE8AF05,"Texting while driving is very dangerous. It could put the driver's life at risk but when there is an emergency, the driver should be able to attend that emergency but a safe and lawful way. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1d5467d01c9f,179A2FE8AF05,"Let's say, that a family member is very sick and he or she doesn't have a vehicle to drive itself to a hospital and the only way to take that person to a hospital is by calling someone for help. If that person doesn't pick up the phone, the other person that's sick could die. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+682492ee367c,179A2FE8AF05,Many would say that this is a reasonable excuse but risking the life of an innocent drier is not acceptable. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d1a1e98a5e1b,179A2FE8AF05,"Therefore, texting and riving should be illegal because insurance rates raise in price, it is against moral conduct, and it is the reason many people die. Distracted driving could be the cause of many fatalities but placing the phone down while driving could save millions. You would not want to live with the death of someone on your shoulders.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2e09fa904c3d,17A4777DCC71,I am going to be telling you what i think of technology being able to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom and if i think it is valueable. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+64ec8aa51bda,17A4777DCC71,I think technology reading people emotional expressions is valuable but then again i don't think is is valuable ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+57189914133f,17A4777DCC71,being able to know how people feel can actually help the enviornment but then it can't ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e17a72d9391,17A4777DCC71,"peoples reactions emotional expressions are different and people are different some people can have bad emotional expressions and it could be harmful, and it could be painful for others. People can have really great emotional expressions, like being happy all the time. It says in paragraph 1 that Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. People can be the complete oppisate of that and it couldn't be good on other people, But people can also be like Mono Lisa and it makes the inviornment a better place knowing people are happy and not sad, discusted and angry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7631c8545cd3,17A4777DCC71,I would have to agree and disagree because it basically goes both ways. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5f514f706e41,18A22DA09EF0,"Cars are a normal form of transportation some might say, but in Vauban, Germany there is a car free town. ""Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this new experimental district on the outskirts of Freiburg, near the French and Swiss borders"". Says paragraph two in the article ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", some people may find this scenrio strange but its actually becoming more common. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+83c40a8a115e,18A22DA09EF0,"Many countries all over the world are starting making either a ""car free day"" or on certain days, making people pay fines for driving. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+be0efeac8438,18A22DA09EF0,"an example of a ""car free day""  is in Paris, France. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24b8f95f2783,18A22DA09EF0,"This city has typically more smog than other European capitals. ""Last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found"". After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear air pollution of the global city"". Monday motorists with even number license plates were ordered to leave their car at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31)"". The same would apply to odd number plates the following day"". The congestion went down sixty percent in the Capital of France, the smog cleared enough monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd numbered plates on Tuesday. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dfb5e39ea8f9,18A22DA09EF0,"another example of a car free day is in Bogota, Colombia. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a758ff8b9043,18A22DA09EF0,"""Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work on car-free day"". This day in Bogota has been celebrated for three years straight now, ""where cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of seven million"". The goal of this day is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Even when it rains on car free day in Bogota this doesn't stop people from participating,"" says Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus. A businessman says ""it's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+850a8205f3bb,18A22DA09EF0,"countries all over the world are trying to reduce greenhouse gas emissions and smog. Paraguay, France, Colombia, and even America is trying to get people to use different types of transportation and reduce smog. So citizens all over the world should just for one day not use a car. One person can start a revolution for their community, city, or state. If everyone all over the world could do this we would reduce tons of greenhouse gases amd smog. We can make earth a better place and more healthy enviroment.                  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0b6050e9f412,18D68AEC46D6,If the usage of cars are limited their would be less greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d943bd5d32e,18D68AEC46D6,"Greenhouse gasses are responsible for global warning and the melting of the polar ice caps. If you limit the amount of car usage their would be less cars on the road and it would by a lot quieter at night. In some parts of the United States 50% of the greenhouse gas emissions are from passender cars. thats a sign that we need to stop relying on cars so much. The fact is that if were our passenger cars are giving off that much greenhouse gasses, than our cars are giving off the most greenhouse gasses and its time to make a change. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a0ad5b0f9cc,18D68AEC46D6,If you want to help cut back on the greenhouse gas emission than only use your car if your giong a far distance. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6235c8be2580,18D68AEC46D6,"you dont need to use your car to go down the street, or around the block. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+243ffe40ff29,18D68AEC46D6,You should use your car to go anywhere in your neighborhood thats walking distance ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7b484f508883,18D68AEC46D6,So next time your about to get in your car think about if you really need to take your car.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+29e79551a0f8,1911B040B77B,"Venus is the closest planet to us in our solar system, which means we should explore it. At least, that is what the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" believes. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9fb212b33e19,1911B040B77B,he does not support this claim very well ,Position,Effective,,,
+12d6f288ddba,1911B040B77B,"as he gives only one vague reason to explore it, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b9aacc61f081,1911B040B77B,"he names several dangers and obstacles of exploring it, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+58e37a114811,1911B040B77B,"provides very few actual solutions. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3e930b02b9ca,1911B040B77B,"First of all, he does a good job of naming the several dangers and obstacles of exploring Venus ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e20e01a5aa65,1911B040B77B,"such as the extreme atmosphiric pressure. The main problem though, is the temperature wich as the author states, ""average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,"" (Paragraph 3). This poses a problem as most metals and other materials melt at such high temperatures. However, the author fails to give very many solutions to these issues. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+758a8e4c729a,1911B040B77B,The author only provides two solutions to the numerous problems that he previously stated. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b8d66952c3e3,1911B040B77B,"Those solutions were to stay above the atmosphere where it is not as hot, and to create mechanical computers that were more reinforced. These solutions would be all well and good had he not brought up a problem with the first in which he states ""peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only little insight on ground conditions"" (Paragraph 6) thus, it is not a true solution to the problem at hand. But maybe there is good reasons to keep trying to come up with new ways to explore Venus. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+72a71aa1f3c6,1911B040B77B,"Sadly, the author only provides one vague reason for which scientists should still try to come up with new ways to explore Venus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e49e5971c7ca,1911B040B77B,"This reason of his is,""It may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system"" (Paragraph 4). The problem with this is that it does not go very deep into why it being similar to Earth matters. A scientist at NASA might understand any signifigance in that statement, but an average person might not. For that reason it is a very weak argument. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+214d1b4269eb,1911B040B77B,"In short, The author does not support his idea for exploring Venus very well because he only gives one vague reason to explore it and he names several dangers and obstacles of exploring it while providing very few actual solutions. Had he named more solutions and reasons to explore Venus it would have supported his idea far more. He named too many dangers without ways to properly combat them, which is why the author's support for his claim was weak. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4eda9f5e7df3,197CEA0EF269,"It is the last day of school, the only thing on your mind is your exciting vacation and the warm weather, the only time that you are free from teachers telling you to what to do and when to do it. When all of a sudden your teacher says that you have a long and tedious project that is due at the end of summer ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b937d44426a1,197CEA0EF269,"As a response to this, I argue that students should be the ones designing these projects ",Position,Adequate,,,
+62d0359ca774,197CEA0EF269,"in order to increase specific skills, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed786500f0a6,197CEA0EF269,bolster creativity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+518920255c76,197CEA0EF269,"gain experience designing the project. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f12f7357ff4d,197CEA0EF269,"Throughout the school year, projects that are assigned by teachers don't capture student's true capabilities and skills. However, if students designed their own projects, they could finally display their strengths, which would lead to an increase in motivation for perfecting the project ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e0a78c86e38f,197CEA0EF269,"Furthermore, students have responsibilities and activities during the summer that may cause a low quality project to emerge if they don't have much motivation. For example, students who compete in the school science fair do very well because designing your own project increases motivation for yielding a higher quality project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2b587813d5ad,197CEA0EF269,"
+I once heard, ""necessity is the mother of invention."" This quote is indicating that when their is high demand for something, or if someone is wondering how or why something works, new inventions and innovations are made. When considering projects, the same rule applies; questioning what you are interested in yields innovation that have built this country since day one. For example, Bill Gates wouldn't have founded Microsoft is he didn't research and look into what he was interested in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a011f9e8f219,197CEA0EF269,"This proves that when students create their own projects based on questioning and logic, their is a greater chance for success. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+466f34b040a5,197CEA0EF269,"During the school year, everything is designed by teachers: tests, projects and homework. In response to this, I raise an important question, how do you expect us to be the next generation of well rounded and intelligent people, when we have been told what to do and when to do it since day one? The only way to give students this freedom of choosing how to design the project without disrupting normal school schedule, is to assign it in the summer ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c5691320c183,197CEA0EF269,"Not only does this bolster self thinking and creativity, but also it utilizes the summer months, a long period of time, to think about and develop this project. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+9103f424b326,197CEA0EF269,"In response to the question of giving students the right to design their own projects, I argue that in order to increase specific skills, bolster creativity, and gain experience, the best choice is to give students this ability to design their own projects. In general, these skills will help students prepare for adult life, where they will need the specific skills that are full filed through this project. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+74643f8df3ae,19C1FF204DD1,"In the first story it is talking about how cars aren't really drivin near the French and Swiss. Though theyallow the cars they just allow them to be parked in only two places: the car-owner buys a space or it to, $40,000 along with the home, or large garages at the edge of the development.
+
+David Goldberg said "" All of our development since World War ll has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.""
+
+Paris, France has enforeced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the gobal city. Diesel fuel was blamed, since diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the Western Europe.
+
+In Bogota, Colombia they ban cars altogether. they go rid of the roads and made them into sidwalks. Now that people have to walk to get to their final destination a lot of people now go to the parks and to the sports centers that they have there.
+
+President Obama's goals are to curb the United States ' greenhouse gas emissions will get a fortuitous assit from the incipient shift in American behavior. Obama said that if we Americans buy less cars then there would be less drivers lisenes each year and fewer driving altoether.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b008e96d8ccb,19C2D7C5171D,This might be a good way to help stop school shootings ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0915082cfa8,19C2D7C5171D,You can identify which studnet needs help and can go and talk to that student . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2cf0505205e6,19C2D7C5171D,Being able to read emotions can be helpful but it may also be distracting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a89c3be3e838,19C2D7C5171D,"For example"" the student appering unintrested and or bored and it automanically changes to a video game"" ? Some student are special needs or may be thinking about something happing at home or maybe what's for lunch ? , and the next thing they see is their work has been erased and or changed and they can do nothing about it and send them into a panick attack and can not focus on anything except trying to calm down. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f8f054114be,19C2D7C5171D,Im both with and against this . ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+74a4a89593fc,19C2D7C5171D,We have a right to privacy unless there is a reason for worry. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95f05cf032cf,19C2D7C5171D,"This could possibly assist students who have a undetected disorder or possibly prevent school shootings . We should have a personal right not to reveal are emotions if we do not want to , but i think if there is a cause for worry on certain students than maybe we could try it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+72b1e0ce53bf,19C571180C49,"Every Summer, as school is nearing an end, the other students and I are ecstatic to have some of our future teachers come into our classes and tell us about what we have to look forward too after the break ends, as well as finding out what lesson we will cover, fun projects, and the supplies we should for the class. What does not please any student however, is when they find out that they have to finish a lengthy assignment before their summer ""break"" is over. Created by teachers who have no idea of your level of learning, nor who you are, students will inevitably feel overwhelmed ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2a5e929f855d,19C571180C49,"The students taking the classes themselves should created the assignment,as even though the teachers may make the plans for the class, ",Position,Effective,,,
+ba5198dd1510,19C571180C49,these students understand where the new students are coming from ,Claim,Effective,,,
+91d28d15bf40,19C571180C49,as well as the challenges faced inside the class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d47f86bf21bd,19C571180C49,"Although teachers try to fill their summer assignments with care, they fail to understand what the students they are getting actually know. Just because the students should have learned everything from the previous year, most of the time other factors would come into play. Some material was overlooked due to time constraints, while some material was discarded in the depths of the students mind as they felt like they would need it. Nothing felt worse than having a lecture by a ne teacher a material we should have learned the year before, but no one at all could remember it. Having the upperclassmen, who were inside similar shoes to the newer students, make the assignment, they would reinforce what the students will have to know walking into the class day one. Upperclassmen would also be able to address through the assignment what material they never learned that the students would need for the beginning of the school year. Even though the teacher should plan for the students to not have learned all the information from previous years, the upperclassmen, through experiencing the class would be better able to give specifics on what future students need to know before school ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bd04a7d94e6d,19C571180C49,"Even though the teacher makes the lesson plans for the year, the previous students remember what is actually important for the class. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+74a8f8293e4a,19C571180C49,"Many times before, upperclassmen have been able to help me through classes by giving me advice on what material was important for the final tests of the year, ranging from simply names of people we have studied about, to entire units that made up big portions of the test. Some times the teacher might skip entire portions of the class, causing the students to miss out on very critical information. Having students create summer assignments allows them to fill students on what they have to know for the year. Instead of being surprised by content they would have never known about, the summer assignment would serve as a guide for the year, preparing new students for what to come. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+71e3523e420e,19C571180C49,"Some may argue that it is the teacher job to prepare the students, and create summer assignments to reflect the year, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b288c6e16a3f,19C571180C49,but the students who took the class ultimately know what the students will need to pass the final tests. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bbaf47f994b2,19C571180C49,"By understanding and experiencing the challenges the class faced before and during the school year, The upperclassmen would be able to create a better summer assignment for the new students. throughout school, not only have i sought out upperclassmen, but underclassmen have came to me asking for advice on classes or help studying. Students for a bond with one another, despite the grade level, in order to survive in the educational ecosystem. Unlike teachers, students know what they need in order to succeed as well as regrets and mistakes they will urge the underclassmen not to do. What else would be better in helping new students for the year than a guided assinment created one of their own? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+69a401aa01f2,19E57B0657A6,"Summer projects are something that some schools require students to complete. They are given so students may continue to learn, even during their summer break. However, there is a debate whether summer projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b2acdba71943,19E57B0657A6,"While some may argue that a teacher-designed project would give some guidance for the students, others believe that a summer project designed entirely by students would allow students to let them be more creative, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+54d7a0e3d94a,19E57B0657A6,students can choose a topic they like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7dfc0ff8979f,19E57B0657A6,students can solve a problem they relate to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5514b69bf5f9,19E57B0657A6,Summer projects should be entirely student-designed to give students a better learning experience during their break. ,Position,Effective,,,
+0c192f8d68bb,19E57B0657A6,"
+First, students can choose a topic that they are interested in for their student project. For example, if a student likes video games, then they would be more motivated to do their project than a summer project with the topic of gardening. The students will be more motivated doing something they like, simply because they enjoy it. No one wants to do a project that no one likes. In addition to that, students may also be more knowledgable in their topic if they are able to design their project. A student could know nothing about gardening and complete a poor project. However, if a student knows everything about video games, then that student can create a very excellent project, because its a topic they like ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aa24bf0cbd95,19E57B0657A6,"Student-designed projects allows students to do what they want to do, and have control over it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ee6dcc4e169d,19E57B0657A6,"Next, with a student-designed project, students can have more freedom in what they want to do. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5b2e8d4f6410,19E57B0657A6,"Some students may not like what topic the teacher gives for a project. This can decrease the motivation for some students to do it. However, with a student-designed project, students can be more creative with their project, because people like to learn what they are interested in. Freedom will also make students more motivated to complete their projects, because they are free to do anything.. Freedom can also allow students to be critical thinkers. Some students are the ""go by the book"" students. This means they always follow what they are supposed to do and not think outside the box. Student-designed projects allow students to think differently and not just use what they have always learned in school. Freedom is key for summer projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c934495ff3b6,19E57B0657A6,"Lastly, students can choose a problem that students relate to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e7a05d11d4f,19E57B0657A6,"If a projects asks for the solution to a problem, then students can choose a problem that affects them. This would allow students to have a better understanding of the problem and how to solve the problem. It would make students more motivated to try to create a solution, because of how the problem affects them. For example, if a student chooses a topic about global warming, most students know about the dangers associated with global warming, which gives that student a better understanding of the topic. In addition to that, the student would be more motivated in doing their project, because global warming affects that student and everybody else on Earth. Having a problem that students can relate to for a summer project would increase motivation and knowledge of the topic. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+05442a332de2,19E57B0657A6,"Students should be able to design their summer projects to give students a better learning experience. The freedom to do anything, the ability to choose a topic, and solving a relatable problem are all associated with student-designed projects. Student projects will allow students to do whatever they want to do and be motivated. Motivation is the key idea for student-designed projects, because motivation is what drives students to succeed. After school is over, there will be no teacher-designed projects, and for good reason too. Students will have to do things on their own without someone telling them to in life. Student-designed projects are the key to a good education for all students during their summer break.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b3e1a31fef17,1A04C4505577,Some schools are requiring students to do a summer projects to assure that they are learning during their break. Do you think that this project should be designed by the teachers or students? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+471997bc8b9c,1A04C4505577,Teachers should design the project ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fcb60dbf0a28,1A04C4505577,they know what their students struggle on and could include some tips. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4478b22ff239,1A04C4505577,"Teachers are with their students the whole year so their most likely to know what each student struggles on, it may not be the whole class that struggles on one topic but the point of the project is to go over certain topics so you won't forget them. The main reason students take test are to see what they struggle on or lack knowledge in and with the teacher designing the project it will focus mainly on those topics. If the students were to design the project they could focus to much on one topic or may not include the most needed topic at all. For example, if it were a math project the student could struggle with their multiplication tables but have more knowledge on everything else, the student could forget to include the multiplication tables or they could just focus lightly on the topic they really need. Teachers could include a guide or some helpful tips to make sure that everything that is to be known about that concept will be there. Students could have payed attention to the topic but still couldn't comprehend it, the teacher could know some tips and tricks to help make it easier for a struggling student. Including helpful tips could also make it easier for the students who have learning disabilities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e2cf1d1d9bd1,1A04C4505577,"Students that struggle with a concept could teach themselves the wrong thing. A student that is struggling with a concept will probably use the internet to try to learn more about it, certain websites can teach the student the wrong thing or probably won't teach them at all. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c58cd5f3642f,1A04C4505577,Teachers will use their knowledge and what they've learned to teach the student the correct way or how they're supposed to learn it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b727f6c65741,1A04C4505577,"Teachers can tell the students how to format the project in ways they won't forget it. Students might just write down the topics and not the way to do it or they could even just write down a problem about the topic and later on forget how to do it. Teachers can give the students a certain amount of problems so they won't forget or if it is a written or typed project it could tell the students how many sentences they will need. For instance, if it is a writing project it will tell the students how many spaces they will need, when they should indent their sentences or how they should use certain words. Telling the students how to format the project could even keep the paper neat, if the students were to write all of the topics together they could later be confused on which topic is which. It could even help you focus on the topics you struggle with the most. If the project was being graded formatting could make it easier to point the teachers in the direction of certain topics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2b308b71185e,1A04C4505577,Teachers informing the students on how to format could really save time and keep things neat. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15b0ce06d814,1A04C4505577,"I believe teachers should design the summer projects for the students. Letting the teachers designed the projects will make it easier for students who don't understand, students with learning disabilities and it will make it easier for teachers and others to understand. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2ef5c72a4563,1A26AFD79998,According to the article there are new ways to find out how a person is feeling such ass computers. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4a10964fb312,1A26AFD79998,"Computers can tell how someone is feeling according to the article ''some new computers software that can recognize emotions''. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34eb70660da1,1A26AFD79998,"You might ask how can a computer tell how we feel.
+
+They can tell how we are feeling because of our face expression with our face expressions they know if we are feeling good or bad.
+
+Humans can tell how a friend or family member is feeling aswell by the same way computers can tell by our face expressions if your head is down or your face just doesnt look like youy wanna talk that mcould mean that your really not happy or when your face is heald high and you want to talk to everyone that can mean your really happy it all depends on your face expressions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc6b5d48536e,1A26AFD79998,The mona lisa demonstration is one of the paintings that showes how someone felt ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2e6eda3e488e,1A26AFD79998,Accordig to the facial feedback ''theory of emotion movig your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them''. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a1fb3b6d0434,1A26AFD79998,Students should have the technology to see how they feel ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea40228ed731,1A26AFD79998,because they would actually understand the emotions people are going through ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+618ff82b5d05,1A26AFD79998,"putting a happy face sometimes is not your real happy face it could just be a fake smile.
+
+you can see how fake your smile can be by looking in the mirror and doing these three things.
+
+1. Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth 2. Then squint your eyes slightly to produce wrinkling at the corners of your eyes.
+
+3. Holding that,raise the outer parts of your vheecks up toward your eyes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4eb6be943b8,1A26AFD79998,Dr. Huang even knew individuals showed degrees of exprssions ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c4c0839c4ee6,1A26AFD79998,"he used video imagaery to track the new facal movements on a real face. this software tracks all the facial movments and mixed emotions every face they get is compared to a neutral face.
+
+Dr. Huang is a colleage expert at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+670c84ef8bcb,1A26AFD79998,Imagine being able to communicate with a computer and being ablle too see how you feel. thats why now technology is getting better for us to interact with them and be able to communicate.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8439cd59ceb5,1A30D1140E7D,Its not a good to thing to come up with some new technologie ,Position,Adequate,,,
+564f1debcc4f,1A30D1140E7D,because you probabaly dont know what people been through ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+063c0f5cd913,1A30D1140E7D,You dont no if sonmbody family remember passed or it could be anything ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3a30b8b1fca,1A30D1140E7D,i wouldnt want no new technologie about my feelings. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa5b08550291,1A30D1140E7D,"My evidence i got out the article is imagine being able to detect exactly how other person feeling i got that out the article to help me withmy answer. Thats how i found out my answer cause i got it out the article.
+
+The main point of me saying my opion is because how the lady looking in this picture it look like she dont look to happy or less she just making up fake smile to hide her pain.
+
+In article two it says could you calculate your emotions like math my opion of that is no but in the way it seems like people could calculate your emotions like math. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7034f13ca25d,1A72E7E7F1F2,The way the Author was telling us throughout the story was fasanating ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+cf7791face36,1A72E7E7F1F2,he let you know everything the hwole way. he studied about the pmanet Venus to let us all know about it and understand it better so we arent as worried to think aliens are on that planet but if they knew that no life forms live on that planet and people get a relief. They steady study about the the way Venus is what if thier is a living form okn the planet but just is hiding like no one would ever know but they are still trying to find things out and thier are things we do know about but are going to find out alot more about. They are trying to improve thier computers the way they do thinhgs just to get to where they need to be to be able to research what they want to research but we just have to eaiot and see wjat other things we have to go through and face with the earth we have right now is getting worse and worse people try and justify others when in order to judge someone you have to of went what they have went through and its hard but we try and move as a team to get to where we should be going. The better we get technology wise the farther we can look and just do things it would be amazing and just progress and everybodyu would be good. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+666927b75174,1A76F8E4EE76,"Some people don't believe in alien lifeforms on other planets; they would say, other planets can't support life there due to multiple things: no oxygen, water, food, etc. We scientist respond to this with, ""We have all those things here, there has to be some other planet like us."" ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6d523181a89e,1A76F8E4EE76,"Humans need food, water, and air to live, but that doesn't mean that aliens do. They could be like plants and create their own food inside their bodies. As for water, NASA has discovered that there used to be water on the moon, so what is there to believe there couldn't be any water anywhere else.
+
+People can be very religious and about the Bible and God, but other people can be all about evolution and not creation. If humans evolved from animals, then we might not be the only ones. Which means that if humans can evolve into humans, then other organisms can evolve, also. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0dde1b3a5724,1A76F8E4EE76,"The Face on Mars might be a butte or mesa, but that doesn't mean other organisms don't live outside of the Solar System. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d625ab84854e,1A76F8E4EE76,"We can't leave here, so we won't ever be able to know. Life beyond Earth may be just a myth, but it also may be something truly amazing. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2042d90b4f18,1A9893654A41,I do not believe we should use this on any students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43451318d046,1A9893654A41,"because for the fact it reads all of our emotions, which we don't always like to show now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad4bff476cb2,1A9893654A41,"""The process begins when the computer costructs a 3-D computer model of the face,"" to me that just sounds like something may go wrong for the fact we have the same kind of camrea for the Iphone and people have trouble with that. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+97d83a36bce6,1A9893654A41,"Another problem for his idea is, ""That facial expressions for each emotion are universal,"" I really don't know about the meaning of this but it doesn't sound good to me either. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07231fe89fa4,1A9893654A41,lastly I would want them in schools because then I believe it will make schools have more bullies if someone had one and they used it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd13aab9e8e8,1A9893654A41,"Plus they say that technology is going to take over the world, this just might be another reason for this to may be happen. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf9f955905a0,1AD1F738D48B,"This technology would be useful in many ways. This technology could be very valuable, but it also could be too much for us to handle. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c693172d4252,1AD1F738D48B,"With technology like this it might make learning things online more interesting. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74e41f8310ef,1AD1F738D48B,"Imagine reading a boring documentory about a hero you are writing about for class, as you continue to read the article, a suggested website pops up with interesting facts about your person with more information.
+
+Now you are more interested and the computer has done its job to change your feelings on this presentation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a81399b3c38,1AD1F738D48B,"We could use this technology to do many other similar things like that. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66ab5db3b855,1AD1F738D48B,"Maybe one day you are just down in the dumps and all these videos you are watching are just making you feel worse and even more bored than before.
+
+Then a suggested video pops up and you are able to watch it and laugh and it was able to take your horrible day and turn it into just another good day.
+
+These are the nice things this kind of technology can do for us. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b069ca26e0f4,1AD1F738D48B,"Although you might think it is strange to have a computer know exactly how you are feeling when you sit down at in front of it. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6507fcd8909f,1AD1F738D48B,"There would never be a dull moment in front of the computer though. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+5119c806cd1d,1AD1F738D48B,"Maybe you are just sitting around and you get bored and have nothing better to do so you get up and you make your way to the computer and play with the emotion detector just by making faces at your computer seeing if it can guess how you are feeling. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0070a6ae29a1,1AD1F738D48B,"Technology is advancing quick, it is nothing like it used to be, but either you have to run with it or get ran over. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dee1ab02135c,1AD1F738D48B,"Things are changing fast we have to change with them.
+
+This is why this technology is so valuable, we can use it in many ways even if its not important.
+
+We can still get use out of it, so why not make it a thing? In the article it says ""She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent digusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry"" talking about the Mona Lisa painting.
+
+Now you cant tell me that that is not cool at all. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5720749615d,1AD1F738D48B,"Its pretty amazing what they can do with technology these days so we might as well adjust to it instead of push it away.
+
+That is why we should be able to have technology like this.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a96138f4f29,1ADE56C19ACC,The technology to read a emotional expression is not valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be97fc852be3,1ADE56C19ACC,"Because computer are wrong everyday they are the smarts thing on earth but they still get stuff wrong once in a while . They don't know the true feeling of happy and sad . They just computers . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8c08b6801c0,1ADE56C19ACC,There millions of reason why it not valuable well for one a person could be looking happy in the picture but be reallly sad emotional ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+316301555341,1ADE56C19ACC,"I see it everyday at in the world .Like for explain when someone die and they go to a furel you got to look cool or happy ,but on the inside your heart broken and never be the same . And you take a picture on a computer and it would say you are happen but you really not because computer don't know emontional they just know knowledge . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+989473b7d054,1ADE56C19ACC,I mean don't get me wrong it a good tool it see people emotional . ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b9b694c544d4,1ADE56C19ACC,"But that why we got eyes for , to look and see things ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dbaad1484cd9,1ADE56C19ACC,We dont need computer to see people emotional we can tell by the way a person talk ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f476073b839,1ADE56C19ACC,If that person sound like he or she got a additon (come back) that mean that person is in a bad mood and don't want to talk at that time . A computer wouldn't even know he or she in a good mood or not by the way they talk. Another good reason why it's not valuable. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53b0292dbb29,1ADE56C19ACC,"Does computer even have emotional?
+
+I don't think so but they can't tell people emotinal . ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3338b4002ba3,1ADE56C19ACC,Compuer don't know what true happence or sadness mean they just tell us whatever they programer put inside them. True happness is something you don't feel its just there . Sadness is somthing thats doesn't feel good something that hurts on the inside. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83c4a1988d91,1ADE56C19ACC,So yea computer really can't read people expressions just from the face . If it so great im looking in the computer now can you tell me my expression they probably say im sad but im not m just worry . to pass his test so yea computer are not valuable to expression for people emotional ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1173a0b79d58,1B0B7D83419C,"Th author did not do a very good job supporting his idea that we should explore Venus, despite the risks. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+514a3e33a1a6,1B0B7D83419C,"In this article, the author did not give reason why we should explore Venus.
+
+He just gave facts about Venus and its dangerous conditions. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+996d82d761fd,1B0B7D83419C,"The author only explained the risk involved in exploring Venus, and not why we should, despite the risk.
+
+An example of a random fact that does not back up the authors suggestion: Spacecrafts that land on Venus never come back and only last about two to three hours. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+821b9e09ac7d,1B0B7D83419C,"At the end of the artcle, the author finally mentions his viewpoint on the subject.
+
+But during the actual article, it is not once mentioned that we should go to Venus. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ea8b37246a8,1B0B7D83419C,"In conclusion, the author does not support his suggestion that we should explore Venus but instead lists off random facts he knows about Venus and what we would do if we get there. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c375d52dbad5,1B1FBDE25C2C,"In my ophion, technology reading students emotional expressions is the dumbest thing ever ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9c32425cbeb4,1B1FBDE25C2C,"First, the apps they are using just changes the student indivaully like you can not make someone be happy on a computer you can make them look happy they should not change someone for who they want them to be vs what they are. Second, you should not change a photo or use any edits because thats changing you and you should just be you if you dont smile thats okay dont let people judge you on how you look you should impress your self not somebody eles. Third, People today need to realize that changing someone in any type of way could hurt them even worse. Yes, messing with peoples emotion or sometimes trying to figure it out whats wrong with them can set off alot of things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2008539c54a7,1B1FBDE25C2C,"Instead of making someone look happy people should talk to the person that is upset, trying to be there for them maybe thats all they need or tell them soemthing postive to brighten there day. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+af41513a7ef5,1B1FBDE25C2C,"In Conclusion, I think changing someones pictures to make them look like they are happy is the wose idea ever because deep down they know they are, but do you just because someone makes and upset face dosnt always mean they are. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fa220301ca4c,1B2470F552CC,"Have you ever wondered what people are feeling? well now you can. Their is this new software than can tell you what people are feeling eve tho they are hidding it. Dr. Huang's computer sinces a 3-D model (human musles). it can even read a painting, it want tellwhere your eyebrows should be and where they are and hiw suprised are you in that moment. It can tell you six diffrerent emotions, happiness, anger, fear, sadness, surprised, and disgust. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+13dd8c3506ea,1B2470F552CC,Dr. Huang's invention is very interesting ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2b20da8d65b1,1B2470F552CC,"one day I would love to use this meachine. its just so diffrenet from looking at your friend and seeing what you think their feeling that actually feeling what they are feeling. In this article they were testing da Vinci and they named a code for it. it is called ""da Vinci code."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9118cce89d3c,1B2470F552CC,It's so crazy to think that a computer can tell if your sad or happy ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+374a49d5140f,1B2470F552CC,"if you did a lab on if your partner can tell if your happy or sad. the comouter can tell if your faking a smile and if your really smiling, but in a humans eye it hard to see sometimes. people say that your faking a smile until your cheek bones move and tightin up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b259f85bbaf4,1B2470F552CC,They should do one in a classroom to see if the kids are bored and what time they get bored and intertainded. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fd53b58b61f,1B2470F552CC,I wonder what peoples thoughts about seeing things online and see what their emotions are when their looking at stuff online. or like if you can read someones face when their walking into a interview and what they may be feeling. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+973af481bdcd,1B2470F552CC,Whoever can revel so much of this tecnology could maybe make more things in the future and maybe make more products of the face reader and study peoples faces and show what they could be thinking somedays. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d435013cb3cb,1B2470F552CC,i think this idea is pretty cool ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+838d97455b89,1B4BA44BD3E9,"Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness,surprise,anger,disgust ,fear and sadness. they are controlled by facial muscles above your eyes. People can tell when u are fake smiling or making a fake facial exspression. There is a new technology called the facial Action coding system enables computers to identify humans emotions. They also exsplain how people can tell what your emotion is by your facial exspressions. They can tell if you are happy or sad just by looking at you also when u fake smile specialist can tell because it streches your mouth sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle. A muscle called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraesus makes crow's feet around your eyes which is also a sign that u have a fake smile. They also explain the steps you can do to show what they are talking about with having ""crows feet"" when you are fake smiling. moving your facial muscles not only exspressses emotion, but also helps produce them and putting on a happy face eventaully works. some actors have to use these emotions and facial expressions when they are on stage. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+75878ac351bd,1B4BA44BD3E9,its crazy how making faces could show so much about emotions. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+bb3bdd7a7e0f,1B4E66B0BE0A,I do think that there are advantages to limiting car usage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+103e11863936,1B4E66B0BE0A,because of pollution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6514f08f8d05,1B4E66B0BE0A,many different transportations ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c3040142876,1B4E66B0BE0A,car culture. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+210f8f088aa4,1B4E66B0BE0A,pollution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0451b4ef3431,1B4E66B0BE0A,"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog, the smog rivale Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gas. Diesel make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines. Paris has more smog than other European capitals. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df2e17f23639,1B4E66B0BE0A,"there are advantages to limited car usage because of many different acts of transportation. In Bogota, Colombia a program is set to spread to other countries. It was called a ""Car Free"" day which meant that you could not use your car for a whole day. Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day leaving the  streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85bf674fd4ea,1B4E66B0BE0A,The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84022eb94922,1B4E66B0BE0A,"""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,"" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82d6ae6b094d,1B4E66B0BE0A,there are advantages to limited car usage because of Car Culture ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8308f9cac2a6,1B4E66B0BE0A,". President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions is to shift in American behavior. Research studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The United States has long been one of the world's prime car cultures. The number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005. ""What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn,"" says Michael Sivak, a research professor at the University of Michigan's Transportation
+
+Research Institute. The internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d1a09789980,1B4E66B0BE0A,"there are many different advantages to limiting car usage because of pollution, many different acts of transportation, and because of Car Culture. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8875771f4aa7,1B976DF43007,"In the Challenge of the Exploring Venus, the auther suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers I think he I right, but i think that the dangers are to much to risk. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a8b55cb03e5c,1B976DF43007,"In the story the auther calls venus the ''Evening Star'' and said that it was one of the brightest points in the the sky,but it also said ''while venus is simple to see from a good distance, but safe vantage point from eath.'' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a9a90d0724e6,1B976DF43007,you can't get close to venus because it's too dangerus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9d1549e884c,1B976DF43007,Some of the ways that venus is too dangerus to go to is because we know what will happy if we go. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8a8b66aaf35a,1B976DF43007,"We sent things up befor and each previous mission was unmanned but for good reason, since not one spacecraft survied the landing for more then maybe a few hours. Thats when we saw the issue and stoped sending up sacescrafts. Not one spaceship has touched down on venus in more that three decades.
+
+A thick atmospehere of 97% carbon dioxide covers venus, also to add to that theres even more difficulit clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid on venus. On the the planet the conditions arfe far more extreme then anything humans encoouter on earth or anywhere so far. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we have on earth. besides high presurs and unbareable heats, the weather is bad too. Erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquackes, and very frequent lighting strikes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+27c68d26970b,1B976DF43007,"In the end, our travels on earth and farther should'nt be limitted but at the same time we are facesed with dangers and things we sould strive to do better in but we should do our best to look at the word without getting to close to danger. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+084a3ca15ddc,1BB48664CC6A,The Leonardo da Vinci's painting was his bigges painting in thw world he made a 83 percent happy will 9 percent disgusted and 6 were percent fearful and only 2 were angry. The Mona Lisa demonstrantion bring a smile to your face when you see it whit your one eyes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+920c5242576d,1BB48664CC6A,it show you how computer can do just imagine a computer that knows if you were happy all the time or if you were sad ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fae8362c958,1BB48664CC6A,"The painting Vinci did was only one of the thing he did he mad more thing in the pass but the whole world knowes him for this one pating he ,ad and everyone from king to people like me and you come and see it ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+93aaee484295,1BB48664CC6A,Leonardo da Vinci will be the best man in the world for making this ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c2bcc9771602,1BB48664CC6A,at his time the detels he put in to this and the paint he put in to was one of the best thing he could of done. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2cd28db69a8b,1BC1E6EAB178,Studying Venus is worthy to pursuit the despite the dangers because the people is stuying the Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6e1265ec4557,1BC1E6EAB178,They trying so hard but the Venus atmosphere is almost 97 precent carbon dioxide b,anket around the lant and the heat stays inside of the planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+ae1f5c851ac2,1BC1E6EAB178,"the Nasa people been making stuff but they say, ""while Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantege point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b3f6e833011,1BC1E6EAB178,"The Nasa said that ""These condistions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, but such and environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our Oceans and wuld liquefy many matals"". so they mean that if they go there i die soo easly bc of the heat and the imposible because the planet is 97 persent blacket around of the planet. But they trying to send something on the venus but it died it was one of the oldest michanical they mad e for space planets so they can take a photo.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aec2ddaefaeb,1BD82BE8C639,"In ""The Challenge of exploring venses "" the author suggests that studying venus is a wrothy prsuit despite the dangers it presents ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f6eb74994e12,1BD82BE8C639,The author thinks studyinfg venus is a worthy pursuit because venus is the most earth like planent in our soloar system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90b3ca9cc703,1BD82BE8C639,"venus is the closest planet to earth in term of denstiy and size, and occasionaily the closest in distace too."" the author belives one day that people cuold go there and vist and study on venouse more or maybey even live there, "" imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher ataltitude to fly over many stroms,a vehicle hovery over hovering over venus wuold avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out their way ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+350de1f1d632,1BD82BE8C639,But studying vesue is pretty challageing and dangeus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24403676c7b1,1BD82BE8C639,"being able to study tha planent you have to be on it and that diffcult because "" a thick atmousephere of almost 97% carbon dixide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of hihly corrosive sulfuric acid in venuis atmoahere."" and ""since no spacecraft suurvived the landing for more then a few hours. maybe this issue explans why not a single spaceship has tuoched down on venus in more than 3 decates."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56c76b2e1fcf,1BD82BE8C639,""" noumerous facters contrirbute to venus's repuaton as a challenging planet for humans to study on."" ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+77f2549b4f58,1BE3C3E7DE6C,Do you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy? You should ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f61cbdf15572,1BE3C3E7DE6C,there are lots of cool places to see. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f06153761251,1BE3C3E7DE6C,Also you can have a fun time on board. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fe6c1a296818,1BE3C3E7DE6C,Third you get to help others in need. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+127f0e60a2b9,1BE3C3E7DE6C,"
+First you get to see a lot of unique places ",Claim,Effective,,,
+95ccfd161545,1BE3C3E7DE6C,"In the passage it states that Luke(or I) got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. He also visited an excavated castle in Crete. I also marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. I loved it So I know you will. You should also go to help others that need help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9944d8423717,1BE3C3E7DE6C,You will get to help others in need if you become a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fc9d64b273f9,1BE3C3E7DE6C,"First, in the passage it states that I had to feed and water the animals atleast two or three times a day. Second, if you are eighteen you could get drafted. That's another way to help. In the passage it stated that I could get drafted, so they told him to stay there and keep working with the Seagoing Cowboys. Third you also get to help work with the Seagpoing Cow boys. If you are a good worker and kind this would be a great job. If you like the Seagoing Cowboys you will like the fun. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f6d3c39769a1,1BE3C3E7DE6C,In the passage it states that I had fun on board. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1940212fb5bf,1BE3C3E7DE6C,"One reason is they would play volley ball, baseball,and table tennis. Also, the Seagoing Cowboys did fencing and boxing. Except if you are layed back and calm you can read! You have a lot of fun things you can do on board. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6535c8ea5d4,1BE3C3E7DE6C,"
+In conclusion, you get help. You get to have fun. Last but not least you ge to see a lot of amazing places! So, to sum it all up... you will have a blast if you become a Seagoing Cowboy.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dcf57fb88091,1BE638E9C951,"I agree, all students should do Extracurricular Activity in school and outside of school ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6b35ad4a6165,1BE638E9C951,I feel like it will help them out with a lot of stuff like stress and can help them find out who they really are ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d784387180a,1BE638E9C951,It can give them time to be with friends and can also give them the chance to met new people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb404b315ef5,1BE638E9C951,it can bring the teachers and students closer to each other. This would give them the chance to get to know each other and try new things out. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+69593bd3ae41,1BE638E9C951,"This program can also help kids not be on their phones as much. it would help kids come all together and work as a team. I feel like now in days kids dont really care about there Schools Extracurricular Activity's. I feel like a lot of kids\teens depend on this phones for answers, ideas, and etc. these ideas will show them that there are better stuff then just being on your Phone, iPad, and Computer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2dd0c99ccf6b,1BE638E9C951,Student's most of the time dont like school so these Activity's can show them that school can be fun. These activity's will give kids a chance to see the bright side of school and also the true meaning. It will also teach kids that trying new things out with new people can be fun. These programs can really make a kids or teens life a huge impact. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1bc2fffeb2e2,1BE638E9C951,Extracurricular Activity's can show kids how to be more outgoing and bring the shy kids out of the shy zone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfcfccea3554,1BE638E9C951,These Activity's can teach kids so many life lessons. It help kids and teens who think they are lazy turn into great students. These Activity's can inspire students to do better in school and lift there grades up. It can help kids/teens find out what they truly love and what they truly dislike. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dab5f83f10d8,1BE638E9C951,I hope my words help out community's who are thinking about putting Extracurricular Activity's in there School system. I truly agree with these activity's and think it will help a lot with kids/teens. I hope one day all schools have fun activities for there students. I think can help many students come out into the real life and show them the true meaning of life. I love this idea so much and wish the best of luck for community with these activities. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a27ac1eed5fd,1C3440A3FFD6,"I disagree, I feel that the Mona Lisa wasnt really expressing 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+b46f2f4602d6,1C3440A3FFD6,"she looked like she was just posing for a picture or to be drawn, you cannot just look at somebody and tell what kind of emotions their expiriencing even if you do studies, it could just be thats how she is as a person all the time. The author uses facial feedback theory of emotion, saying not only does moving your facial muscles just express emotions , it may also even help produce them. They say that faces dont lie but anyone can fake emotions she was just taking a photo or was posing to be drawn they could have just made a conclusion stating she was 100 percent happy, I mean she was being drawn which means she must have been one of the best looking women around or something was good about her and only her, and her face drawing is now one of the most known pieces of art ever created. In the drawing it looks like shes outside so it could be the lighting or something around her that is causing her face to look like that. Its also hard to tell what kind of emotions shes having because she doesnt have eyebrows, the reason I say that is because most people raise or lower their eyebrows when they are trying to make their emotions noticable, so the main thing people can see about her emotions are her lips they look happy but its like a half smile, but the writer claims she is 83 percent happy, it seems much less than that. Her eyes look like she is staring at someone, not dissapointed. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+192b13bb266a,1C41622B0A7A,The author supports the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents realy good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f17302923aa7,1C41622B0A7A,He gives facts and good reasons why people should study and visit venus ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ac00bda9621,1C41622B0A7A,In the first 3 paragraphs he gives interesting facts about venus. He says things that we dont have to know but is nice to know. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+404eeecca7c7,1C41622B0A7A,like in paragraph 2 he says venus is referred as the earth twin and is the closest planet to earth in term of density and size. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39f847633ebb,1C41622B0A7A,In paragraphs 4-6 he starts to explain why people should study venus and explain how venus is worthy to pursuit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a9e6885bb0f,1C41622B0A7A,"In paragraph 4 he says that ""astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar sytem."" Thats him explaining why venus is worthy of studing and has earth like features. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d31bd18fcab0,1C41622B0A7A,In paragraph 5 he beins to talk about NASA and them sending humans to study venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+56ae9d781f7b,1C41622B0A7A,"The author says that ""NASA's possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray."" He is now explaining how they can make it suitable for people to go study venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f01a154764a,1C41622B0A7A,The author wraps up the story talking about human curiosity and earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts. The author supports the idea that studing venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents really good he gave facts and backed up his idea about studying venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a1d2f0d4d923,1C592378CBD1,"After going to school for ten months, students need a bit of a break before starting up again. Not only are their bodies tired, but so are their minds. Their minds are basically at capacity! So when summer break rolls around, students tend to leave everything they learned behind. While understandable to want to stop putting more information in their brain, students should never leave what they know behind. Students work so hard for a long time, to gain new information and more knowledge. In order to assure continued learning, teachers assign summer projects. Unfortunately, students decide to not do the assigned summer projects because it tends to get in the way of their summer. So, what if the switch was flipped and students could create their own summer projects? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+faa2ac2d2870,1C592378CBD1,Students should have the freedom to complete their own summer assignments ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7339a8ea9a58,1C592378CBD1,they're more likely to do the project when it's their own ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5abb421074bf,1C592378CBD1,"students can express their own creativity, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9d40d950d81c,1C592378CBD1,"they will actually enjoy doing their project. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+27a45d281b62,1C592378CBD1,"If students could create their own assignments, they would actually do the work to get it done. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+31c29494a619,1C592378CBD1,"They have all summer to come up with a fun project idea, so why not make it the greatest one possible? Fast-forwarding to when school starts up again, students will have a completed project to present to their teachers and peers. They won't only be happy for the grade, but they'll be proud of themselves for completing their project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d982d40e8fb6,1C592378CBD1,"Adding to the positive, teachers will have a better impression of what their students do. Meaning that teachers will know how to operate their classes, based on their students and how they learn. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c14d8be070f4,1C592378CBD1,Students will also be able to express their creativity freely. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+12f34e2d9879,1C592378CBD1,"For example, one student may not be able to color, paint, or draw, while another student is really good at coloring, painting, and drawing. The student who isn't as good at doing those things, may be better at using computers to create things. So that student should be able to complete his/her summer assignment, on his/her terms. Some teachers assume that all students are capable of doing only one thing, which is very untrue and unrealistic. Students should not be limited to doing one thing, in one way. It's unfair that some teachers grade based on how artistic the assignment is, or how technological it is. Everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses. Teachers should look towards all their students specific strengths, instead of aiming at their weaknesses. Plus, teachers should be very fond of students' creativity in their assignments, and grade them based on the student's hard work, the assignment criteria, and their creativity. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0cbdb43a4c9d,1C592378CBD1,"Lastly, students will actually enjoy working on their summer projects! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e07bd486eb4b,1C592378CBD1,"Since they have their own freedom to create whatever the please, they can make it any way they want. On top of that, they'll have the whole summer to make their very own masterpiece. So, when working on the assignment, it won't seem like such a drag to have to complete. Students can also work at their own pace. Since students do have a solid three months to complete and revise their projects, there should be nothing less than perfection. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29233d9c7cb9,1C592378CBD1,"All in all, students should never stop learning new things. The new way of learning is expressed through creativity. Scott Fitzgerald once said,
+
+""For what it's worth... it's never too late, or too early, to be whoever you want to be.
+
+There's no limit
+
+"".
+
+Students should not be limited to creativity, creativity should be unlimited to students. Students should create their own summer assignments, to assure the continuation of learning, and to show them there will never be a limit to their own creativity.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4f7414d81fc9,1C8340F2AEE0,Have you ever wondered what other planets are like? Have you ever gotten the questioned yourself about these other planets like... Have scientists found other lifeforms? Have scientists found resorces on other planets like they have on Earth? well then if thats the case let me explain you why ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f69fb7ddde14,1C8340F2AEE0,"""Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents."" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0047ec8f5596,1C8340F2AEE0,There could possibily be other life forms on other planets and even Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b7ba7dfb688,1C8340F2AEE0,"how there's life forms on Earth, typicaily Humans, Animals and even Bacteria like Algy and Fungi, In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" In paragraph 4 it says ""Venus could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19b2f92a092e,1C8340F2AEE0,"Another reason why Venus is worth studying is, like the Sun its the hottest thing in our solar system ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c67c1af1ec6e,1C8340F2AEE0,"what if Venus is not as hot as the Sun but what if Venus is hot for anything to be on there, in the article "" The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" In paragraph 3 it says ""Venus tempreture average is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e38cc5ef13f,1C8340F2AEE0,what if it relates to Earth in many ways? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4e8db7f23218,1C8340F2AEE0,"In the article in paragraph 4 it says ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e67df760f1b4,1C8340F2AEE0,"This is all the evidence on why Venus is worth discovering dispite the dangers while, Scientists may have discovered a bit of Venus and a bit of Mars unfortionatly for now some of those planets remain a mystery while some are on the very peak of changing from the unknown to the discoverable. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+92adc55a313b,1C9693E27251,"That ""Facial Action Coding System"" is a Joke ",Position,Adequate,,,
+193cdf5002c5,1C9693E27251,"We all know that there are different emotions going are the school. The different types of emotions that are commonly at a school are happy, mad, sad, bored, or even nuetral. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99c55d9f708c,1C9693E27251,"My question is, why do you care how the student is feeling? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+93ce4ec2f756,1C9693E27251,"I know that the teacher himself or herself does not want to be here so, what makes them think that us students wants to be here. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+62501e1891ec,1C9693E27251,"A student comes in the school the teacher says, ""Goodmorning!"" The student just walks past without saying anything. Let me take a guess, the student is not feeling school, sleepy, or even that student might not like the teacher. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7158f412f737,1C9693E27251,"We do not need a ""Facial Action Coding System"" pulled out to just find out the students feeling. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf3e96cc64e0,1C9693E27251,"In paragraph eight, it states, ""To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ""smiling"" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c0ea044be09,1C9693E27251,"A person lied, why can the investigator not do the job how it is suppose to be done taking everything step by step intead of getting a machine to do all of the job. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d6aecb114a6,1C9693E27251,"
+By the way, how are you feeling now that I am stating my opinion? I hope you are feeling great because I know I am. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+94d7b0867c54,1CE967B8E5C9,Lukes particapation to the Seagoing Cowboys progam allowed him to experience adventures. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+921d42973dfa,1CE967B8E5C9,"The one thing it didn't mention in the artical was his family where were they the whole time Luke was on board.
+
+The artical never mentioned a mom or dad.
+
+Was Luke alone with no communication skills. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c398565137e2,1CE967B8E5C9,I think you shouldn't join the Seagoing Cowboys ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+607d11d29e81,1CE967B8E5C9,you wouldn't get to see your family for as long as your with the Cowboys. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bda22becd52,1CE967B8E5C9,"Yes, it's an adventure ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7d4b387bb37c,1CE967B8E5C9,but you could get sea sick or worse home sick. If you get home sick you may not know what to do. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cc2990401c19,1CE967B8E5C9,"You wouldn't want to go out in the sea, unboard animals then go back to main land. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad4d8e9bdc56,1CE967B8E5C9,"No one wants to do that. To many people would get sick and not want to go back on board and that would just put more pressure on you to do more work. You won't know if you have a certain amount of time to do certain things on the boat, who knows. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1232c48fdcac,1CE967B8E5C9,"Luke may have loved all the adventures and great times, but that's only one person's point of view of the whole idea. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4da96e5d693,1CE967B8E5C9,"You would need more oppinions in order to see if it is a good service to work for. Everybody may say joining the Cowboys is an amazing idea but others may say it's a terrible idea. How much money does it cost to join the Cowboys, They never mentioned that either. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d09a38f0653a,1CE967B8E5C9,Luke's particapation the seagoing Cowboys was amazing in his mind but thats his mind not yours. Choose wisly on whether you want to join the seagoing Cowboys. It's your desicion not Luke's or anyone elses. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6a229ba930b4,1CF149052D11,Some teachers feel that students should complete a summer project during their break to have them continue their studies even during the summer. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1ed1c8e1e4a5,1CF149052D11,These projects should be student-designed to promote a students own creativity and ability to create a project based on the subject they learned ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c09d0a4f1d1,1CF149052D11,Allowing individuals to make their own projects means they will have the freedom to design the project how they see fit, ,Claim,Effective,,
+a7cc05b268d0,1CF149052D11,"furthermore, this may even benefit the teacher by showing that their student has absorbed enough information from the class, that they can detail an entire project about the curriculum without ever receiving any instruction from the teacher. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+02935a3bc250,1CF149052D11,"Students perform better when they are able to dictate how their project is written and designed. if their was a strict code detailing what the project must include, the student may produce a worse report than they would otherwise. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2ce1fc1a66e4,1CF149052D11,"Given creative freedom, someone would also have to apply more of their own knowledge of the subject. Having to adhere to a strict code however, would mean they can simply research the specific topics the teacher asked for without needing to apply much of their own effort ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5bac7cc205b7,1CF149052D11,"If the enforcer of this project wrote a rigid outline describing exactly what a learner must write about, the report could very plausibly be submitted as a mindless paper with no true interest taken in it. The individual could provide exactly what the teacher asks for, no more, no less. One may even be rewarded for this work since they did all that was asked of them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02f54acb4cc4,1CF149052D11,"All someone would need to do for a report, if it has strict rules, is follow those rules entirely while putting minimal effort. People could be given a high grade for doing as the report said, even though they turned in a mediocre paper with no real care in the subject matter. There wouldnt be a way of giving this mediocre paper the grade it deserves, because the student did what they were told and they took advantage of that loophole. To avoid this mindless compliance, students should instead be given total and complete freedom on their report as long as they apply everything they've learned throughout the school year. This would be a double edged sword, while they are free to design however they want, they must also put in more effort because they will not get any help or instruction from the teacher. Some may believe that a teacher-designed project is a better alternative because if the teacher has a specific rubric, they can help the student by giving them a code to follow ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1a63233cbf60,1CF149052D11,"It should be the opposite, They have helped their students all year, now it is time for them to finish one last report by themselves, to prove they can retain this information without any outside help. The teacher has finished their job, they have taught the entirety of the curriculum to their learners, and now those learners must utilize all the knowledge given to them in one project, on their own. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3eb61af964f2,1CF149052D11,"This makes them feel that they only have an obligation to simply know certain ideas. In turn, this causes them to memorize specific vocabulary words or the answers to certain questions. Instead, people should be encouraged to memorize the concepts themselves. Take in all the information regarding an idea to truly become knowledgeable in the subject as a whole, as opposed to learning the answer to specific questions so you can pass a test later and forget about it almost immediately after. This is exactly what this final grade is: a test. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b82795d25ea,1CF149052D11,A test with one chief purpose: to display one's complete knowledge and understanding of the class they have partaken in for the past year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+18be9e46b23a,1CF149052D11,"This should not just be something you can memorize a few vocabulary words and write down a couple notes for. It would prove absolutely nothing if you can simply study for this project and write down what has been memorized. To really take on this endeavor, the students will have to include everything they have been taught over their four quarters of experience. They must be graded on how much they really paid attention and how much effort they put into the class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e8e80dd56393,1CF149052D11,"summer projects should be student-designed to allow students more freedom to dictate their project, which may cause some to submit a report worthy of a much higher grade than they might have otherwise received. It would also prevent mindless compliance stemming from a feeling that they have an obligation to adhere to a strict set of rules a teacher has laid out for them, leading to an equally as careless report. Given creative freedom, A project will be much more personalized and thoughtful, and will require more effort to be put into it. This will all prove that the person will be able to properly retain all of this information outside of school, whether it be during summer break, or after they have graduated completely. In everyday life, they wont have someone who can immediately tell them all of the answers, A summer break with no external guidance will prepare them for this reality.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1702fc6446d8,1CF48E3DD535,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents to humans that even get near the planet. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b2338d0bfaf8,1CF48E3DD535,"Even with the dangers that are poised against those who would go near Venus, there is still intrigue in the planet from our simple human nature, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+05c714d6abb3,1CF48E3DD535,"the opporatunity of studing an Earth like planet besides our own, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e59e96f1244f,1CF48E3DD535,Venus is so close to Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2016c0862a90,1CF48E3DD535,"The main reason of studying the planet Venus is capitalized by the article and the author in this quote ""Often referred to as Earth's ""twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+658aef571325,1CF48E3DD535,The Author also simply puts in the article that humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus all unmanned. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e036293c125,1CF48E3DD535,Another reason for the intrigue in studing Venus is our simple human nature. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13e1d9719192,1CF48E3DD535,"In another quote by the author and in the article ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus beceause it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system."" the author gives us a reason and it's a reason that makes logical sense. The landscape of Venus is also described in the article as Earth like. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8363c182aac,1CF48E3DD535,The author suggested studying Venus would be a wirthy pursuit despite the dangers. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e6dc9e52abdc,1CF95A009AE5,How many people die yearly from texting and driving? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3221596b1dc5,1CF95A009AE5,"Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. 1 out of 4 accidents are caused in the united states by texting and driving. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ad91dde5dab,1CF95A009AE5,"Drivers should not be able to operate cell phone use while driving, it causes the driver to get distracted from the road and that could cause the driver to have an accident. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+87f12cc48857,1CF95A009AE5,"However, some drivers may still respond to a text message and that is why many of the accidents occurs and most of the time this lead to a vehicle accident that could lead to death.
+
+Drivers need to understand how easily it is to take someone life or themselves.
+
+Everyday people are risking their lives due to the high rate of cell phone use while operating a vehicle.
+
+Therefore, nowadays cell phones are unnecessary devices because they are a distraction to drivers while their on the road.
+
+Because of their conversation they might get upset and this could lower their driving ability that can lead them to lose control over the car.
+
+If people don't make the right decision and put their cell phone away while driving their routine could harm innocent people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53154536e665,1CF95A009AE5,Some people may feel uncomfortable without their cell phone mainly because they are so use to having their cell phone in hand while driving ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a7664da10381,1CF95A009AE5,". On the other hand there are disadvantages of using cell phones, they can easily get lost. Talking on cell phones are very expensive. In addition, cell phones are not useful while driving, drivers should pay attention to the road instead of getting distracted from a text or phone call. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+185fe917eba5,1CF95A009AE5,"In conclusion, I think that cell phones are indispensable tools that we cannot live without, but we should avoid using them while operating a vehicle. Therefore, we should think carefully about the advantages of cell phone use while on the road. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+254b4548d5a5,1CF9D84E94C1,"we are all zombies on these devices no one cares they make so many things easier for people to do and enjoy themselves. The way society shows us is that we all use phones like idiots and honestly, my opinion doesn't change because I know that many people have used their phones pretty stupidly and lose their life for it ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+089a5e11fa9f,1CF9D84E94C1,use it when not in the motion of driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a403f3d5c32b,1CF9D84E94C1,Keep your eyes out for police. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bcee9a587d74,1CF9D84E94C1,"
+Driving is our main way of transportation so we need to keep ourselves safe and everyone else safe ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebc09b3c81da,1CF9D84E94C1,"the best way to do that is to keep our phones away keeping your phone is smart while driving because texting and driving is a big no-no in everyone else's eyes. The only reason why I think people need to follow this is because I've driven with people who have sat at the light because they were stuck on their phones and I had to tell them to drive so, to be honest, we need to limit ourselves to do it only when are stopped in traffic or we just parked up somewhere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad0790626f4e,1CF9D84E94C1,"I don't drive yet but everyone should just know this rule or just follow it at all times watch for police, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+856c27a77171,1CF9D84E94C1,"police are like enemies they protect the streets and I respect them for that but honestly, they should always be avoided I'm not saying avoid them at any means necessary but just keep seat belts on and don't text and drive that's the easiest way a cop will catch you so make sure to get wherever you need to go and just move on try not to get in any trouble. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ec8f41328af,1CF9D84E94C1,And to conclude phones are really convenient devices that make millions of things easier for us day to day humans ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dcd896fd7d1f,1CF9D84E94C1,we need to limit ourselves to just using it when not driving and only when it is really needed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+60197b6894ff,1CF9D84E94C1,"many cars nowadays come with their own little carphone technology that will speak to you and do stuff for you.
+
+Apps like Waze make driving feel much safer and cars like teslas and the other cars I spoke about before can be great substitutes for phones while driving.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b84c65d7071b,1D023C6D201A,It could not be made by aliens because Mars can make land forms such as a face or something. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7bec5cec37af,1D023C6D201A,"If you look at these three images you will notice over the years we have been able to unblur this image and it shows there is no face on Mars. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3221e743c4a3,1D023C6D201A,"
+We have snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, reaveling. . .a natrual landform.
+
+As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were objects in the picture like airplanes on the ground of Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were.
+
+What the picture actual shows is the Matrian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. New high-resolution images and 3D altimentry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A messa. l   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7c15d1c81fa,1D4FBE746B88,"Today my firend Don Reist inviited me to come with him to the Seagoing Cowboys program he wanted me to go and tought about and Want to go mainly becaues I was 18 and out of school and i can get dafted to the army.
+
+Don telled me that since the war was over we go to this other country and help them out a little sice it was a big mess over.
+
+It was August 14, they reported us at New Orleans. When we got there they were giving out thing to do before the ship got there they said for me go get more peole to do this program and I did. I walked down to the bordwalk got a big line of people the fun thing was that if you get to convince eveyone who does not want to go then they just go some were real nice and just went but they were probalry going to be dafted like me.
+
+August 15 the cattle boat was not there so, they said do the same thing again the same thing happend got a lot of people then they gave another job that it is to see wich man was strong enough to go they said i got to much people so, we get the strongest of the strongest two hour went bye and when eveyone was at lunch the boat was there .
+
+August 16, I guess sleeping in a boat is the same thing as sleeping in a bed room but the bed was always moving but I can't lie about spleeping good last night. tonigth was a big night for me I was a wachtman . It was 11:00 ol'colck and it was raining and the waves sarted to pick up and then i slipped!
+
+down a slide thank god i'm ok but I had to be in bed for a little with a cracked rib.
+
+I was being dafted but they told me to keep doing my servive so, I did and I had the best three years ever I helped over 1 millon people and I visted nine countrys the good thing is that I'm ok 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8bc436942f7,1D6188632F9B,I think that its a good idae to send more probes to venus even despite the cost. i am totally on bourd with this. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+2e5fa8b6afa1,1D6188632F9B,The author made some good points and suggestions why we should send more things to venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ca7fe4e9ecf,1D6188632F9B,first scientists are researching a way to last longer to get to venus and land on it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20c5b064f049,1D6188632F9B,because it is the closest planet to us but defining the risks it will take they are doing research. but they are trying to make a man pod for a human to go there and study it first hand. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc664cd66c38,1D6188632F9B,second scientists are also finding a way to make these probes and pods to withstand venus the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2d10cfed605,1D6188632F9B,simplified electrons made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface. it has lasted three weeks in simulation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db4dd698d345,1D6188632F9B,lastly they are also looking into an old technology that has more withstand to that stuff and its called mechanical computors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+436d6dfb8fc0,1D6188632F9B,". they were created in the 1900 and was used in world war 2 they had no electronics it was just gears and wires and levers. but they do the job they can withstand a high pressure of heat and other forces. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4576e5100cd6,1D6188632F9B,the author did support his story with facts that if we dont do it now then human curiosity will do it later ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+547b21b8d351,1D7E734B4A3D,"Some Schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during the break.
+
+Some may point out that since the students are the ones taking time out of their break to complete these assignments, they should be the ones designing them.
+
+Others may argue that the teachers should design these projects. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cb2b1c856eee,1D7E734B4A3D,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f370bf99f378,1D7E734B4A3D,"the teachers will be the ones grading them, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2dc6ab03bc25,1D7E734B4A3D,"they will make sure that there is still an element of difficulty, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bdb894813918,1D7E734B4A3D,they know the content best. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e1abaa20b039,1D7E734B4A3D,"One reason why summer projects should be teacher-designed is that the teachers will be the ones grading these projects. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+634c22a4a024,1D7E734B4A3D,"Teachers spend hours or even days grading assignments.
+
+If students designed the projects, it would be harder for teachers to determine what the grading rubric should include.
+
+It should be up to them what they will be inevitably grading at the start of the school year.
+
+Most teachers have new students every year.
+
+If students designed these projects, they would be different every year.
+
+This would lead to mistakes because the teacher would not be as familiar with the assignment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e674267f3f8f,1D7E734B4A3D,Another reason why summer assignments should be teacher-designed is that they will make sure the project will still have an element of difficulty to it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5928eae81230,1D7E734B4A3D,"It is teachers' jobs as educators to continue create and assign projects that are challenging enough for the level that their students are at.
+
+If students designed their projects, the projects would not be very difficult.
+
+This would be because students generally prefer to spend their summers doing other things than homework.
+
+If the assignments are not challenging, than the students are more likely to forget about it or not care about it.
+
+The point of summer assignments is to keep the students engaged and learning throughout the break.
+
+Teachers would make sure that the assignment is easy enough so students dont spend their entire summer stressing about it, but challenging enough so that the assignment is still effective. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9987fc7f5ec6,1D7E734B4A3D,"The last reason why summer projects should be teacher-designed is that they know the content best. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+e61e7d93e079,1D7E734B4A3D,"The projects assigned are most likely for the class the students plan on taking the following school year.
+
+For example, if a student is taking algebra 2 and plans to continue on to pre-calculus, the student doesnt know much about calculus yet.
+
+That being said, how would a student design a project for a class they havent taken yet.
+
+The students are there to learn and it is the teachers job to teach them.
+
+The students should not, and could not, teach themselves the content required to know for the following year.
+
+The only person who can properly prepare students for a class is the teacher themselves. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cdf7a64c876a,1D7E734B4A3D,"In conclusion, the summer projects that some schools require students to complete should be teacher-designed.
+
+First, Teachers should be able to create what they will be grading.
+
+Second, Teachers will also make sure that the projects are not just pointless busy work.
+
+And last but not least, It is the teachers job to educate student on unfamiliar subjects. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fa899baa87d2,1DAD3DD9D08C,"Hi, i'm Luke, and one day I was working at the bank and my friend, Don ask ""Hey Luke, you want to go to Europe on a cattle boat with me!"" How could say no to that type of question? I'v always want to do this.
+
+The UNRRA hired ""Seagoing Cowboys"" to take care of all the horses, young cows, mules that were shiped oversea. Don and I signed up for this adventure! 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+82f04d6848f0,1DAD3DD9D08C,i'm here to say you should sign up and be the best Seagoing Cowboy you can be. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c23bd92b7f77,1DAD3DD9D08C,You get to help other people and animals. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdf024c23883,1DAD3DD9D08C,"Before I got here I was a small little town boy, and I really never got to experince the majic hidding behind of being a Seagoing Cowboy. I even got a little of the benefit of seeing Europe and China. I also went to Acropolis in Greece was special. So was taking a gondola ridein Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I also got to see an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.
+
+Also, when I help out other people first, it makes me feel good second off it perpares me for hard work along the way of my life. I also got to be a night watchman I did get hurt a little but, before the week was over I was back to work, and better than ever. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+401d28952956,1DAD3DD9D08C,"I came here to try to explain how much I loved this trip. It prepared me for life. I hope you will join and become a Seagoing Cowboy. The phone number is below
+
+(555) 444-7774     ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b117a4c63158,1DC6485ABFF6,"Do you participate in any after school activities? Well if you don't now you have to, my principal if making it mandatory to participate in at least one after school activity. You can participate in many activities such as sports teams, student council, and the debate team. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7bb92bed4fc1,1DC6485ABFF6,There are many points for why this shouldn't be a rule in school. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6c174bbd1d1a,1DC6485ABFF6,"Some points are time management, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e18b753a740a,1DC6485ABFF6,"interest, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+91b5849cdbed,1DC6485ABFF6,funds/workers. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+70414e8a3151,1DC6485ABFF6,"One of these important things is homework, if there doing activities they don't have time to do the homework a teacher assigned. This would lead the student to be behind in there classwork and cause there grade to drop. The second important thing they wouldn't have time to do is there chores. A lot of kid have chores and if there not done there parents will not be happy. This leading to the kid getting in trouble and getting a punishment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b64740817cef,1DC6485ABFF6,if there is no activities that interest the student there not going to have fun. And if they are not having fun they will slack off and not try there best. If a student doesn't want to do a activity that may cause them to make there own fun and act out and get into trouble. Then there parents would be angry and they would get in more trouble and the teachers would be angry because if the kid got Saturday school the teacher have to come watch them. Plus if they get in trouble that will mess with there record. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bac54937564a,1DC6485ABFF6,if you have more activities you need more money and more people to work them. And the school would have to ask the county for more money and the county might not have that amount of fund for the school. And you have to find the people to work those activities witch may be hard to do. And the schools may not be big enough for the activities to all be housed there. And that means they might have to rent a space for a activity to be held and that cost more money. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d92c9bd7e233,1DC6485ABFF6,"That is my three points on why I thing it would not be a good idea to make it mandatory for every student to participate in a after school activity. I already participate in a after school activity but I hope it is never mandatory. It would not achieve what school want witch is to keep kids active. It would only make the problem get worse and wouldn't fix it at all. The three points are funds/workers, interest, and time management.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+90c9df281113,1DEDB886B240,The new technology called the Facial Action Coding Sytem would't be valuable computers to identity human emotions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d4ce2b620aa4,1DEDB886B240,"First,Dr Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for human and computers to comunicate. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1531f2f2b9f5,1DEDB886B240,"Dr. Huang think that it won't make a differences by the new techonlogy. Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,digust,fear,and sadness-and then associated each charachteristic movements of the facial muscles..Using video imagery,the new emotion recognition software these facial movements in a real face or Mona lisa. If a computer could identity then it should identy all 44 major muscles in the movement like humans. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a2ac9856705f,1DEDB886B240,"Second,""the facial expressions for each emotion are universal,""observes Dr. Huang.""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confued or bored""Dr. Huang predicts.""Then it could modify the lesson,like an effective human instructo.""""Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communicaton,""notes Dr. Huang.""So computers need to understand that,too."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2c8bf10c4386,1DEDB886B240,"Then,Your home PC can't hanlde the complex algotithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d77ae47988ca,1DEDB886B240,"But we can wrtie down some simple instruction that""encode""different emotion. In fact,these are the instructions for a face that looks happy. It;s all about those muscular action units. Humans could tell a friend is feeling simply by he look on her or hise face. Of course,most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that convy happy,worried. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c52fc3f06df0,1DEDB886B240,"Finally, A classroom of student could identify more then the new technology could do. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b15d0bafa40,1DEDB886B240,"Sometimes,human might smile from the outside but human could change their feeling. A classroom of student could see their friends by thier looks. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+373c82f9d980,1DEDB886B240,"Conclusion,The new techgology won't be valuable to read the expressions of students in a classroom because empathy may happen. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5435bacd0d36,1E12037C0F98,"There is an advantage of limiting car usage, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+62157d23e447,1E12037C0F98,it prevents pollution and smog. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c430e2b8ae8,1E12037C0F98,It makes your life better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37821b9cea14,1E12037C0F98,"in Vauban, Germany a residents of this upscale community aew suburban pioneers, where people have given up their cars. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes.
+
+The residents are trying to make cities denser, and better for walking for the past two decades, so Vauban, home to 4,400 residents within a rectangularsquare mile, may be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life. In United States, the Environmental protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities, and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42b2436f8334,1E12037C0F98,"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. It is either leave your cars at home or suffer with a fine of 22-euro on mondays with even-numbered license plates and the same with the odd-numbered plates the following day. Because Paris typically has more smog than other European, delivery companies complained of lost revenue, while exceptions were made for plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying 3 or more passengers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+871e9ac7e829,1E12037C0F98,"A lot of Americans are buying less cars, a study last year found out that driving by young people decresed 23 percent betweeen 2001-2009. Executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, laid out a business plan for a world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+63e3fb556bea,1E235AB03C8A,"Writing a strong and supported essay takes more than just advanced vocabulary and a plethora of facts . A strong example of this is the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c476d0a42141,1E235AB03C8A,The author did not support his topic very well ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d181711e747d,1E235AB03C8A,he didn't support his main idea enough ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c04b68659ca4,1E235AB03C8A,he strayed away from the topic many times ,Claim,Effective,,,
+13eef0f31e3e,1E235AB03C8A,"his information is an abundance of opinions and assumptions. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+ceabf356e972,1E235AB03C8A,"
+First, the author brings up his topic of "" Studying Venus is a worhty pursuit despite the dangers it presents"". Despite this, the author only gave one full paragraph, out of the eight he wrote, on why humans would want to explore the planet ; he then preceeded to go onto the dangers of Venus, rather than why it is worth exploring. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7a3fa71c86e1,1E235AB03C8A,"Secondly, the author ,many times, rambled on about other points that had nothing to do with his main idea. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1651b2dcf62a,1E235AB03C8A,"The author gave an entire paragraph about the new technologies that NASA is working on to explore Venus, even though his main idea is about why we should send shuttles to Venus. In the article it states "" Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II"". This entire quote has nothing to do with the topic whatsoever, which shows that the author was gettting side tracked. One reading just this quote from the article would most likely think this article is about computers,and not why humans should explore Venus. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9e12b2aff3d2,1E235AB03C8A,"Finally, the supporting evidence that the author did bring up, weren't very factual or even well thought out. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+98a9104daa6e,1E235AB03C8A,"One of the points brought up was ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth"". The author uses the word ""probably"" which means that he doesn't know this to be a fact or not. The author also wrote ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus"" ; this is an opinion, seeing as some astronomers might heavily dislike venus. A good informative or arguementative essay provides facts to supports its ideas, rather than just guessing or presuming. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a6402826380,1E235AB03C8A,"The author does not suport his ideas well, because he draws the reader away from the topic many times, he doesn't support his thesis very well, and the evidence he does bring up are opinions or assumptions. The author provides to much on the ""danger"" aspect of it, and he should focus more on the ""why"" aspect of his idea . So, it would be best if he looked over his essay and ,with his thesis in mind, start over from scratch. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+67a80fa62373,1E2A00D0E43B,"Let me tell you about my life i am a young kid who just grauated from high school who didnt think my life would change this quick. I work two part time jobs trying to make money. The first job i was at was the grocery store. The second job i was at was the bank.
+
+The Seagoing Cowboys program is a program that takes care of horses,young cows and mules. This program giving people lots of good opportunitys in life. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+036203759c7c,1E2A00D0E43B,If you joined this program u could do lots of differents. You would not just do one thing all the time. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cfb44c9cb789,1E2A00D0E43B,When you are on board you can have lots of things to do its not always boring. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8dab4fde4a91,1E2A00D0E43B,"After all the aniamls have unloaded u can can play lots of games. Like for an example the cowboys played baseball and volleyball. There all way more fun things to do then that. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69a7198ccc98,1E2A00D0E43B,Think of all the different place they went ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cdacdbdcfd2,1E2A00D0E43B,"For an example they went to Europe,China and Italy. In all those diffrent place they went to it wasnt just a boring trip. Like when they in Italy they got to take a gondola ride. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eee7ff86b0ae,1E2A00D0E43B,",there are lots of reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Just dont join because u were ask to. They give you lots of opportunity in life that you many never get in life. If you join is program im sure you wont be let down.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e5632b51d98a,1E4261B396CD,Venus is one of three planets that orbit the sun at different times and speeds. Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees ferenheit and the atmospheric pressure is about 90 greater than what we get on Earth. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+67cea646b9e7,1E4261B396CD,These are the reasons why Venus is worthy despite of all the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c251185c3a08,1E4261B396CD,""" Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth's leves. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac12a5c49963,1E4261B396CD,"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans"" (Paragraph 5). So even with the high radiation levels humans can still survive on Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efc18dccaca1,1E4261B396CD,"Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in the chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and lasted for three weeks in such conditions"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+123f529a6ab7,1E4261B396CD,To summarize why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of how dangerous it is scientist have found and made devices that could help pick up and look for sediments on Venus due to hot it is when standing on it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3a70439674a6,1E85D46252A4,"Do you believe texting and drive is bad and can cause car accidents or any terrible thing to happen? Honestly doing any like that can lead to no common sense especially when you have someone in the car with you. Over thousands of people die from a car accident situation which unlikely happy for love one's. I feel like more of this comes from young adults and teens because there still in that developing stage where this and that needs to be learned. Even though, car accidents happen you shouldn't be scared to drive or stop you from driving. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+350a17395231,1E85D46252A4,"You should just be a lot safer than other with driving. But, if you happen to get a crash and it manage to be your fault you shouldn't take it all into that one mistake to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40d42782b32e,1E85D46252A4,There are a lot of things you need to realize with driving and texting. First of all if you do it you need to be cautious and smart about it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b0be3d4aae1,1E85D46252A4,"Because one if you need to text someone because it's an emergency do it at a red light or if you need to tell someone important then just stop somewhere . If you don't do none of the sort you can lead to accident or dealing with the cops. And, you can get in a lot of trouble with dealing with the cops. If you feel like driving and texting is ok then maybe it is to you only if you know what your doing and being safe with those actions. The statistics are very high for teens almost 11 die everyday texting and over 80% of people own cell phones. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e9ddf38808b,1E85D46252A4,Some people would say is sending that 1 small text important that causing your life or that other person life ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8fd3a3c14d26,1E85D46252A4,"Is it worth it because bad things happen everyday even if we don't want them too. Also , you can pull a ride with anyone and if there on the phone and you feel unsafe let them know that but if your scared you risking everything cause you never know what's gonna happen ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e50b84a1fb17,1E85D46252A4,The only thing you can really do is pray for the best to happen and keep living your life. I feel like every driver should be at least 17+ driving because at the age i feel like a little more common sense it should know by now what the rules are. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+51c7474292b7,1E85D46252A4,texting and driving both don't get along or work out for people at the end of the day ,Position,Adequate,,,
+691f4afa049f,1E85D46252A4,"Teens are the main people who get distracted because either there texting or playing with there friends in the car which seems to be a very bad idea knowing they are so very young. People always make excuses as soon as an accident happens with them. They try to say they were getting something that fell or telling one of there passengers in the back to stop knowing all they have to say is i was texting.
+
+I feel like we should have this thing in the future where we get in the car our phones automatically turn off so then there would be no problem with anything. I say this because it's better than doing that one stupid thing then risking however many lives are in thart car. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2fbf25e43c7f,1E8C298D92CB,"""As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. 'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor"" (Rosenthal paragraph 2). Heidrun Walter is the typical mother of two that has a job as a media trainer. Unlike most people, Heidrun lives in the city of Vauban, Germany. Vauban is a one of a kind district that cracks down on car use and promotes walking and public transportation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd70a510a2c8,1E8C298D92CB,Heidrun describes this life as a happier one and that cars make things tense ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f74d5e54e12,1E8C298D92CB,There are advantages to this way of life ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a5ad87da2abb,1E8C298D92CB,such as a rexaled lifestyle ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3204981daf20,1E8C298D92CB,fewer pollutions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+536a91cbd1ae,1E8C298D92CB,"by making the internet a better way to communicate, having funner ways to transport yourself, and making it easier to access stores. Getting in a car to go to a freinds house is in most cases is a long stressful process that can be eliminated through a culture without cars that opens up Internet use to communicate instead. ""She cites various factors: the Internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends"" (Rosenthal paragraph 35). Mimi Sheller is explaining how you don't have to get into a car to be with your friends and that the Internet is a simplier option. Instead of using a car to get to work, it may be a healthier and funner option for people to start walking or riding a bike. "" 'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife"" (Rosenthal paragraph 24). In the quote, Carlos describes how stress is relieved by lower pollution and opening yourself up to activities that you and someone you love could enjoy while getting to work. Stress can be driven by simple things in life such as trying to find a parking spot to access the market. ""In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway"" (Rosenthal paragraph 6). To have less stress in your life it could be easier to live in a no cqar community that makes any store you need only a walk away from your house leaving you free of the harshness of finding a parking spot. Internet communication, alternate transportation, and walk ways to stores make a happier and healthier life for the average person. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3058f4fa199,1E8C298D92CB,"Cars in most countrioes are the leading pollutants and it could be wise for people to try and reduce smog, greenhouse emissions and diesel use by not picking up tthe keys to your car. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+50b43e80a0ef,1E8C298D92CB,"Smog in some place has gotten so bad that car use had to be stopped completely. ""Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog . . .[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world"" (Rosenthal paragraph 14). Paris went through major smog that makes them reconsidering the use of automobiles.        ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+735ba2514e4f,1EA525C7EBF3,In America people use automobiles for evryday life. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+034aaa8dbe3a,1EA525C7EBF3,"Look at it this way, if there werent any cars anymore we would be walking all the time. Which would leed to bad joint pain and expensive doctor bills. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+319b89f57567,1EA525C7EBF3,Plus think of how crowded the side walks would be. Your kids would get lost or even stolen right out from under your nose now do you really want that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+244efb3fff7e,1EA525C7EBF3,Automobiles have been around forever why ruin what people worked so hard to gain ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f1c2a5f9a2c,1EA525C7EBF3,A lot of people would lose their job if we got rid of them. You think the unemployment rait is bad now get rid of cars and watch it increase. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+123d6d897184,1EA525C7EBF3,"And what if your in a hurry to get to work how are you going to get there in time if your only going at a walking speed. The crowd would slow you down emensly, even at school the crowd can slow a person down by a lot. when the teacher lets us out early I dont have to fight the crowd as much and can get to my parent much faster to go home. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b72181f729c,1EA525C7EBF3,"Think about the children, if you were walking one day to the store and look back to see that your five year old is suddenly missing, what would you do. You would look and see nothing but people in the crowd, you would have no clue to who has your child. But if your in your car and you look back he/she will be right there safe and sound waiting to get home to watch there favorite show, not in the hands of a stranger wondering who is this person and will I ever see my mommy again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d46649853c10,1EA525C7EBF3,So think before you do things like take away our car rights. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5deca7ad2525,1EA525C7EBF3,The prompt says to find good things about not having cars but I just cant because the bad is more bad than the good is good. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b39405b1af00,1EC48C7220A9,"Luke Bomberger was a seagoing cowboy. He crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific twice to help people affected by world war ll. He took care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.
+
+Along his trip he got chance to visit many places. He had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. But to him seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special he also said that taking that gondola ride in Venice, Italy also was.
+
+He fed and watered the animals and cleaned the stalls. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled from the lower holds of the ship and thats what Luke did. During the crossings caring for the animals kept Luke busy.
+
+He was a watchman and had to look out on the animals every hour and report back to the captian. One day he was doing his normal rutien, and he had slid down a slippery ladder an his backside and when he slid a small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, kepping from falling overboard in the Atlantic ocean. Helping on his aunt Katie's farm when he was young had prepared luke for hard work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2652d8fb2f8,1EC48C7220A9,"
+In the story it tells you of a man named Luke Bomberger and what he did as a Seagoing Cowboy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+08c50a279dcc,1EC48C7220A9,It doesn't really try to convince you to participate in the program but if you do you can get some details from what he did to what you might do if you joined. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0c52b57766f9,1EC48C7220A9,"After this program he said ""it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs."" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+08b95ab318f4,1EE05F854764,"The technogy that there using it looks wonderful explain every single details how the techonology works and how the testing are. It explain that they make a machine that can read face and pictures just like the Mona Lisa face, they describe that
+
+Mona lisa have 83 percent happy , 9 percent disgusting, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. They explain this just because of a software computer read Mona Lisa face. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cd1fecd3da8f,1EE05F854764,The coumputers are very smart at this time but a computer that reads face is a little bit complicated because they can do almost everything that a human wants but reading face is not so hard. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e23182a9c478,1EE05F854764,Using technology to read emotions expressions of students in classroom is not so good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+390642db20f6,1EE05F854764,"because students can read faces too. A lot of people can read faces even if your mad or not people can see emotional in other faces . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed6369a64ac6,1EE05F854764,"The process of the software computer begin when the computer constructus a 3-D computer model of the face. it explain that thhe computer jus move muscle and the way faces move like in paragraph 3 describe "" all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit "". this mean that they read the muscle in the face to explain what motion humans do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7aaaa2ca9dce,1EE05F854764,"Reading faces is not so hard you can see people if they are happy,angry or sad is not so hard if see someone laughing you can tell that the person is happy ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5bdec4f77f10,1EE05F854764,"or something make happy that person, like in the artticle say "" In fact, we humas perform this same impressive "" calculation "" every day . For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face."" this mean that most people can show feelings on their face. Of course some people have trouble to describe faces because some people doesn't show feelings and other do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a16b6b62945,1EE05F854764,How people feel it depends on them. most people are happy and others sad but every single people can be happy it depends on them not in other persons. The people that are always happy are the ones who thinks positive the ones that love their self ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30abd9f9c8ad,1EE05F854764,a machine can read their faces but the machine doesn't know that humans can change their mind ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+569270f23c00,1EE05F854764,"in less than an minute we can be happy and then we can be sad for a sad news but for the computer it will take time to know when human change emotions because it has to read I again the whole face , compare to us the human can see fast when other person get sad. like a quote it say ""The Mona Lisa desmonstrate ir really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do"". this mean that the computer is smart it can read faces . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42fc10dd4f61,1EE05F854764,The technology is good for in some reason but reading faces too easy for human and humans doens't need a computer to tell hom the other person is feeling becuase humans can read faces too. their is no reason that human need a computer to tell them when ever a person is sad or happy. Humans can just look at their faces just to see of they are happy or sad. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2b6b3d1acc13,1EFAC87220DC,"Summer is a time of relaxation, fun, and time to spend with family and friends. Summer can also be a time for a great off season for sports and a time to get better at your crafts. Many parents and teachers believe that the summer should be a time to really work on your mistakes or bad habits you've made over the school year. Whether its studying a subject, practicing a sport, or even working on your behavior. Over the summer some schools assign projects for students to do ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c6e64886103a,1EFAC87220DC,"I believe that summer projects should be student-designed, but teacher's must approve their work. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0f3c48752d92,1EFAC87220DC,If students were able to design their own summer projects then they would be able to truly use their unique creativity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+69efcb6c5845,1EFAC87220DC,"Students would have the ability to choose a project idea that they like and not some boring project that a teacher may choose. Also more and more students would actually do their projects because they would choose an idea that would be enjoyable. Teachers shouldn't judge your based on the work that they give you, but on the ideas that you come up with. I think more teachers should allow kids to use their own creativity instead of making students into robots and giving them instructions that they must follow. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d05be781314f,1EFAC87220DC,"In today's society, managers don't hire people based on their high school grades, but on their creativity and their great ideas that they could bring to the table. If you want to become a manager of a company or even an entrepreneur, you must have great ideas. You must also be able to use your own creativity to persuade people to join your company or buy your products. Your teacher isn't going to just come up with your ideas when you get older, so why should they now. The younger you are at learning how to come up with your own ideas and how to be more creative, the more you're going to flourish as you get older. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c8af298a0a6a,1EFAC87220DC,Some may say that teacher-designed summer projects would be better because it may be harder and challenge the students more. Also teacher-designed projects may relate to school more and what they might learn in the future because many teachers have a lot of experience. Student's may also have a hard time coming up with their own ideas and could take longer ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+32225f6ab024,1EFAC87220DC,"But this is why I think students should come up with their own project designs and then have the teachers check their idea before they start working, so that their project isn't too easy or short ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+55bce088247f,1EFAC87220DC,Student's would also have to use their brain more and will teach them that they will struggle later in life because creating your own ideas aren't easy. This will better prepare them in the future and will allow them to truly show/express their creativity to the rest of society. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3a1dea22051,1EFAC87220DC,"In the future, our society isn't going to change based on what students get on their exams, but on the ideas that they come up with. Our ideas will truly affect the belief's of our society. This is why I think teacher's should allow students to come up with their own project designs so that they will learn how to use their creativity in order to benefit themselves, but more importantly, how to benefit others. I've already seen so many younger people use their ideas to better help our environments and create less pollution in the homes of animals. I think our world can continue to improve and become a better place by the ideas that we come up using our creativity.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1b04c2eb073f,1F06A4B670A1,Imagine being on break an a student has to to do a project on bird which can be very boring and not interesting. Now the student is confused about the concept of the essay and is starting to give up. So break is about to end in the student is not motivated at all to finish project. Now the student stressed and worried if he/she is going to finish or not. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1ff07a54bbf5,1F06A4B670A1,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+995296968900,1F06A4B670A1,it is less stressful ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a6f91666385,1F06A4B670A1,students will be more organized ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc417d32f631,1F06A4B670A1,it will teach students how to be independent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77e081505692,1F06A4B670A1,students will be more focused on the project because it is coming from the students perspective and not assigned from a teacher. This can also help students with being more responsible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0dc20cac161b,1F06A4B670A1,For an example a person is working and your boss tells he/she to do something and that person do not do it. There is an big chance of that person getting fired because he/she did not do what they we're suppose to do. which can affect what they do in their life and can impacted the way they handle situation. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8c5b6b5dc6e4,1F06A4B670A1,Second student will be more interested because students are designing the project other than just a teacher telling them what to do ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8fdb5094aed,1F06A4B670A1,This could also help with students being more organized when it comes to importuning things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20ca93f3dcc2,1F06A4B670A1,For an example my friend was looking for an expensive pair of shoes that he put somewhere in his closet. But he can't find them in there because his closet is a complete mess. But if he was organized than he would not had lost them in his closet. This shows if your not organized then theirs a possibilities that you might misplace something thats importuning. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf6c978c1db2,1F06A4B670A1,This can also teach students how to do things independent and do things alone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10dbe421d05d,1F06A4B670A1,"This can show that students always not going to have someone to ask for help or someone to guide them. This is going to help them to find a way through because in life it is not going to always be easy. For an example, My dad was battling cancer and he had a lot of obstacles in his life but he always managed to fight threw the battle. Their we're times he was down but he always managed to pick himself up. This show that there is always going to be problems but just dont give up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f164681c152,1F06A4B670A1,"Finally students can now enjoy their break and not have to worry about the teacher with the uninteresting project. Summer projects should be student-designed because it is less stressful, students will be more organized, and it will teach students how to be independent.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0c32194618fc,1F07CBB60940,"Most people know the dangers and risk of venus but why would anyone be detrermined to explore Earth's ""twin"". exploring this planet will allow more knowledge to the experts and allow to educate the society. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2c135f4da4d0,1F07CBB60940,"Despite the dangers, we might get something good out of taking the dangerous risk. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c574e6b9b341,1F07CBB60940,Why would a scientis put people at risk for such a planet? The author is giving the idea that it might be possible for humans to study Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d9ae6720111,1F07CBB60940,"The author says "" Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbe321a50ad1,1F07CBB60940,"If you even had a chance to explore something different and be part of it, would you? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f90cca1be3a8,1F07CBB60940,"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus""(paragraoh 7) NASA is coming up with different technology to be able to move farther to study Earth's ""Twin ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4baf66d92d2a,1F07CBB60940,"electronics made of silicon carbride have been tested"" this is one way they are trying to advacne technology to be able to study Venus. The scientist would taker such a risk to because NASA is inhancing their technology. NASA is even building "" mechanical computers"" which was important to World War 2 becasue of the calculations it made. If this computer made calculations for the war then it would probably have a lot of effect to the scientist on exploring Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70adf41f85b5,1F07CBB60940,"Even though Venus is a dangerous risk, people and experts would love to know the knowledge that the planet will give us. We also woudln't have as big as a risk if these technologies would work out. Maybe the scientsit aren't so wrong on this mission I mena they are experts. Scientit would love to the risk to expirence Venus, give information to others, and have our society grow more in education.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4335fc9669b1,1F3E6E0EF6FB,"To the fellow citizens using cars, its very easy to go somewhere with a ride because you dont have to walk, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7b5566d899e5,1F3E6E0EF6FB,But if i were you i wouldve choosen to walk because it very good for you because its like if you were doing exersice. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3102b0eb879d,1F3E6E0EF6FB,"A lot of people perfere to drve a car because there probably too lazy or something lol, th reason they like driving because its the fastest thing to go somewere quick, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fd84a15872d1,1F3E6E0EF6FB,"but you know its that big advantage about a car but the thing that sucks about a car you have to put gas in it, and thats oretty expensive for some people but thtas why some rich people are the only ones to be able to put gas in it. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0aacd09df624,1F3E6E0EF6FB,"Sometimes its kinda bad driving because the percentage of transportation is getting too high, also theres a whole bunch of drivers that are starting to find according to reuters so that caused to tthe people cars had their cars impounded for their own reaction due to the fine    ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+548d5e194176,1F9026998271,"If my principal were to declare that all students were obligated to participate in an extracurricular activity, I would be less than pleased with the idea. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3ec26d70a904,1F9026998271,I do not believe students should be made to do anything outside of the curriculum by their education system. The mere concept of this rule being enforced shows a lack of understanding or compassion from schools. ,Position,Effective,,,
+76bd0bf6d6fe,1F9026998271,I believe that extracurricular activities are perfectly fine. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0c70f5612bdc,1F9026998271,"Clubs like ""We the People"" are great for those who are interested in American history or writing, and playing sports is perfect for exercise, to no one's surprise. They are a wonderful way of expanding horizons, making friends and exploring new things. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d4f30ca6f400,1F9026998271,"But that's exactly how they should remain:
+
+extracurricular.
+
+As in, outside of the required learning and entirely optional. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+887982f8dec5,1F9026998271,"Students should be free to choose whether they do or don't participate in activities outside of the standard school day. If a student's parents require him or her to do a club or sport, however, that is a very different case. Parents have a say in what their child does, and they have every right to decide if the student will participate in any type of organization. Schools do not and should not have the same level of involvement. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+93865cd9f12e,1F9026998271,turning extracurricular activities into a mandatory affair is either a waste of student time or class time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+65f4405980a9,1F9026998271,"Although making clubs compulsory perhaps sounded like a good idea, not only is it a bad one, it's a time-wasting one.
+
+If every single student will do an extra activity, then by that logic, schools would just add an hour to the school day, which I know would not go over well with many. Besides, students already have significant amounts of homework from various classes. Adding another obligatory activity to dedicate time to could very well be too much. Making extracurricular activities mandatory is also just disrespectful to many family's schedules. Maybe a student had already been participating in a separate, unrelated activity or organization. It could be that the student has a religious practice after school, or he or she has to take care of a family member. The examples are endless. Nevertheless, schools should not take up student's time outside of school any more than they already do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+802277eb00a4,1F9026998271,"if the school system somehow managed to squeeze in enough time for an extracurricular activity for everybody without adding any time to the school day, it could potentially be wasteful of the teacher's already limited teaching time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fbe606e893a7,1F9026998271,"If we only have 45 minutes per class right now, imagine how little it would be adding another period. Educators would be in a constant struggle to cram enough information in such a short class time. If this did happen, it could be very possible that the school year might be stretched out so students could properly learn the concepts, which would leave many students and teachers who love summer vacation with disappointing news. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36b8abe7fb82,1F9026998271,"I firmly believe that making extracurricular activities compulsory for students is not a good idea. Those activities are meant to be optional, and if every student were to do them schools would have to monopolize everybody's personal time by extending the school day, drain the little instructional time teachers have by shortening their classes, or elongate the entire school year. While at first it may seem like a terrific idea, various cracks start to reveal themselves at second glance. In the end, I don't think the idea would have worked.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9ebe42a623b1,1FB2C0AFFDA9,"because he said the sun is more colse from us and mars is more close from the sun but he said tahat venus is actually a planet and hes telling us a lot about the planets and about the ones are more close from us and about the stars he talking to and the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees the earth, venus and mars are neighbor orbit the sun at different speeed. these are dfferent on speed and venus is one of the brighest points of light in the night at the sky venus is a planer in our solar system, but i think the earth and venus are likr twings because iif i thinkg they are th same size and i think the same mass and space and in space terms humans have snet numerous spacecraft to land on this almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus even more over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheri pressure is 90 times greater ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4f8183697421,1FB2C0AFFDA9,"if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4d71b88e079f,1FD98DABF889,"The scienties are trying to put humans on the planted venus they say its human temp there so we can live there. They say there are dangers stuff in venus they still have to see ow would they grow food and kill animals and take it down there. I think this is a good idea becuase it would make the earth a lot smaller in population and not so packed acrroding to the artical venus is big. Sometimes where closer to mucrey then venus and sometimes were closer to venus, venus is one of our plantes and someday some people will live on them its cool how we never thought these planets would be used and now people are so smart. That they make rockets to see how it looks and deel like on other planet of cours it nothing on there yet one dsay weveryone should be able to go there and live and see how it is but a lot of people will get sick because of water issues not the same water u been drinking waether is gooan not be the same. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c1dfb919c4b1,200AA7A37060,"Over the years many schools have assigned summer projects as a way to help keep students minds active while on break. These projects can include reflection essays, construction, reading catalogs, and many other wonderful things. At the moment many of these projects are designed by the teachers, however many schools are considering switching to projects designed by the students. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+21b6f32b48b8,200AA7A37060,Students designed teacher approved projects would be better for the future of education ,Position,Effective,,,
+d273c2b0366d,200AA7A37060,"they would allow students to think critically, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0bcf56951827,200AA7A37060,"increase their desire to learn, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e579b703d0c5,200AA7A37060,tailor projects to their strengths and learning styles. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a6c188222975,200AA7A37060,"Most teacher designed projects rely on specific structures and check list drawn up by the teacher for the students to fallow. They do no prompt the students to: think, learn, ponder, and reflect, rather they give students a list of mundane tasks to complete and check off. Critical thinking and complex learning comes from hands on practice thought and refection. Giving a student a complex prompt or problem and allowing them to design the project themselves in order to answer it, stimulates the brain far more than handing the student an assignment where the answers have already been neatly planed and laid out by the teacher. For a better education students need to be able to solve problems on their own and chart their own waters, they will never grow if they are always defendant on a teacher to tell them what to do and how to do it. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+362e45b76299,200AA7A37060,"Often times struggling students or children who ""hate"" school may just feel bored and there are many students who don't try in school because they feel like the subjects they study have no purpose or that it will have no value for their future career. These students often do not participate in teacher designed summer projects as many see summer as their time off from the burden of school and teacher projects appear as boring and useless to them. If these students were allowed to design hear projects, however, so that they focused on topics important to them there could very well be an increase in their participation and desire to learn. When people study things they like and enjoy the often perform better this can be seen at schools like the Generic_School MATA programs where every student who attends wants to be there and as a result they are active and engaged each day. It can be inferred that if the logic applied to the MATA programs is applied to summer projects, students studying things they enjoy increases learning motivation, more students would participate and find value in summer projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+325c88e361c9,200AA7A37060,"While many teachers say no child left behind that is often not the case with summer projects. Because these projects are assigned before the teacher gets the chance to really know the students a it is difficult to adjust to a students specific needs. A teacher may assign project with lots of heavy reading not knowing that a few of her students are dyslexic, or a different teacher may assign something on a topic many of the students are already well versed in so it has little value to repeat it. Student designed projects would avoid these conflicts as the students know themselves best and could be able to tailor their project to their strengths. Many English classes have already found success in doing this where instead of assigning books that students may have already read or are difficult for some to read, these classes allow students to study books of their choice or listen to audio books. Student designed projects are often more applicable to students lives and as a result they are a better form of education and learning than teacher designed projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+468ba2223a46,200AA7A37060,Some may contradict that student designed projects would promote laziness and the students would not learn anything of value from them. This is why these projects would have to be teacher approved, ,Counterclaim,Effective,,
+2579a3e8aec7,200AA7A37060,"however, even if they are not the value of learning to think and the other benefits of student designed projects outweighs the over specified structure of the teacher designed projects. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ba370e3adb71,200AA7A37060,"In the end student designed projects are most beneficial to students due to their freedom to allow for critical thinking, the study of subjects students enjoy increasing learning motivations, and their unique ability to be tailored to each students needs.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+693c16fab0ba,2010E484FDBB,The technology used in the article shouldn't be used to read students emotional expressions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2daa16541ad,2010E484FDBB,"They shouldn't because if a student is very sad or upset even angry you'll want to know why and probably ask them why they feel that way.
+
+Some students might want to talk about it, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a3c7c5f125d,2010E484FDBB,but most probably wouldn't so it might make them even more upset or angry and sad if you ask whats wrong and they dont want to talk about it. Also if it a personal issue the student is having and they tell you what's wrong and you can't help them they might feel like they're doing something wrong and get sad or depressed becasue you can't help them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed2c2d4aec6a,2010E484FDBB,Also if this was used to read the emotinal expressions of students in the classroom I feel like it would be a distraction and take time out of the students learing to figure out how every student is feeling based on the facial expressions ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a49bb2a4078,2010E484FDBB,"Another thing could be what of the technology making this possible is wrong, so you walk up to a student and ask them why they're so happy but they are actually really sad. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8051d2a3939d,2010E484FDBB,What if the student just changes their apperance to make them look a different way when they are read for their emotion. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+846665925602,2010E484FDBB,The last thing is what are the teachers going to do with the imfomation on how they think their students are feeling based on a facial expression ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2649f677ef49,2010E484FDBB,"Maybe in a college where you want to be a consuler or something along those lines it would be a good thing to have to teach you how to read others emotions better, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8807f967414d,2010E484FDBB,but it would be useless in a middle or high school classroom and just cause distractions. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+110e241a098a,2010E484FDBB,"
+This shows why I dont think the technology would be good in the classroom. Becasue the technology could be wrong. Students could change their apparence to seem a different way. And it's useless to the teachers to have this information. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+284bd05be371,20162733792B,"Computers don't have emotions, but you do! Imagine technology that seriously works for you, not only at home but also in the classroom! If technology could accurately read human facial expressions the learning possibilities could be endless. For example, think about that one story that you're forced to read that you just can't understand and brings out all your frustrations, with facial expression recognition you probably will never be so frustated again. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+73a45fc59101,20162733792B,"The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom is unbelievably valuable. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+c5fe114149f9,20162733792B,"
+Technology in the classroom has already begun to advance rapidly with educational websites such as ; Google Classroom, Edulastic, Khan Academy,and Mathia. The facial recognition technology could enhance a students comprehension to maximum potential. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0dc1233b54c5,20162733792B,"In the passage "" Making Mona Lisa Smile"" the author states in paragraph 6 line 6,""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,""Dr Huang predicts.""then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor."",this kind of technology can possibly boost testing score and even help children falling behind instead of holding them back another year. The text also states in paragraph 6 line 10 that ;""Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communcation,""notes Dr. Huang."". This example actually explains alot of real world issues in the classroom, such as the fact that some students refuse to even try to communicate their confusion or boredom in the classroom so then they often disengage in the lesson and miss every part that would be essential to reaching standards created by the state. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a020f836fd18,20162733792B,"Many parents or administrators may not agree that this sounds real or possible, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ef1cab9001d0,20162733792B,but the logic is right before our eyes. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d123b3c731da,20162733792B,"In the text the author states how the technology performs the task of reading emotional appeals. For example, in paragraph 3 line 1 the author says,""The process begins when the com puter constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit"". So apparently this process goes beyond just looking at the face,but actually looking for the movements in facial muscles. The author also talks about the muscles that present certain emotions such as the ; the muscles above your eyes (frontalis oars lateralis) raise when you're surprised,the muscles around your mouth (orbicularis oris) tightens your lips when you're angry, and more. This shows that the computer breaks facial expressions down to a science. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ca720099a80,20162733792B,"So now what do you think? Computers advance more and more everyday, however facial recognition may just be the beginning. Learning in classroom has become based on all technology in many different forms. Facial tachnology will broaden our horizons with better test scores and happier students that can understand the material evn better than before! The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom could be a life changing improvement in the 21st century since every student has different wants and needs as far their education. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a76e1864b0a1,2017D32A0639,"Many schools across the country require students to complete summer assignments to assure that they continue their pursuit of knowledge even without a teacher present. But should these assignments be designed by the teacher or should they be designed by the student? If a student were given freedom with their project, it would be a lot more enjoyable rather than if a teacher put strict conditions on it. But a lack of strictness would mean that students are less likely to complete their project and they wouldn't know when the work they have done is enough ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1a9843527ce3,2017D32A0639,Teachers should put that restriction on the student and give them a specific assignment to ensure that the appropriate amount of work gets done. ,Position,Effective,,,
+2591819b15f7,2017D32A0639,"Students are less likely to complete a project that they have freedom on and if they do complete it, the quality would suffer greatly compared to if a teacher gave them a prompt or a specific task to accomplish. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+22710b811e88,2017D32A0639,"The point of a summer assignment is to prevent to student from losing knowledge or getting rusty because of a break. Although the point of the summer break is to let students relax until the next year starts, it's still important that they keep their studies up. Assignments shouldn' be student-designed because that would allow too much leisure and when school comes around, most students would not have it done. For example, I had two summer assignments last summer. One was for English and one was for Math. For the English one, the assignment was to read any book of my choosing and write a review about it. This assignment had very unclear instructions and I, the student, was supposed to add my own twist to it and complete the assignment however I wanted to. I started on the assignment, but never finished it because I didn't have the motive since there was no specific prompt to answer to, so I wrote a couple of sentences and called it quits. But for the Math assignment, I had a packet to complete of practice problems. The finish was in sight and crystal clear. I did it throughout the summer and finished it by August. The reassurance I felt that once I did a specific amount of work and followed the teacher's directions, I would be done is what encouraged me to finish. The English assignment was unclear and I didn't know how much to complete to make sure that I was on track for next year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+efb6831124cf,2017D32A0639,"to give the student reassurance and to make sure the student doesn't do too much work over what's supposed to be a break, yet it keeps them on track. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0a7fd355097,2017D32A0639,"If an assignment is student-designed then the student will do one of three things: overwork themselves, not fully apply their capabilities, or not do the work at all. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43d3f4ce3209,2017D32A0639,"For these reasons, summer assignments should all be teacher-designed. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+337e2d578a2c,204F13D548E9,"Mars hasn't stayed the same over the years. Mars has changed a lot over the years. And Mars (aka. the red plant) will continue to changed until the end of time. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+cd33a16eaf77,204F13D548E9,"While we were observing Mars on 1976 with Viking 1 we seen a figure that looked like a human face and that strected 2 miles from end to end. At the Jet Propulsion Lab there had to be a great deal of suprise. Peole started to imidiately think this was created by aliens. That was still to be figured out.
+
+Over the next 25 years scientists studied Mars to determine if this was created by aliens or its just a natural landform. Scientist have been using many different spacecrafts to better understand the ""face"". The picture of mars had become a pop icon. its was in a hollywood film, in magazines and books.
+
+Mission Controllers prepared to look again. ""it's not easy to target Cydonia,"" says Garvin. ""in fact, it's hard work."" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on A JPL website, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.           ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6552b4d9b865,20897B41AFB8,"While almost everyone owns and uses a mobile device, using them while behind the wheel of a vehicle should be prohibited. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+16b3df2f5c10,20897B41AFB8,While mobile devices are useful in everyday life ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5d0180e94ebc,20897B41AFB8,they are hazardous and in some cases deadly when a vehicle is involved. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+85774cd41d6f,20897B41AFB8,"Devices cause distractions that can put not only the driver of the vehicle at risk but also those inside the vehicles, and the people all around the car. Distracted driving is one of the most dangerous types of driving and according to Edger Snyder & Associates, ""the use of cell phones while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes every year"" (Edgar Snyder & Associates ""Texting and Driving Accident Statistics - Distracted Driving""). The sheer amount of crashes involving the use of mobile devices is shocking, and this is one of the main reasons that the use of any kind of device should be not allowed while behind the wheel of a vehicle. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a5885cf2340c,20897B41AFB8,"Although a crash may not seem that bad, some of these crashes result in many deaths and injuries. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3ca8c776242e,20897B41AFB8,"In a 2018 study from the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration, it states that distracted driving claims over 2,841 lives (Andrew. currin. ctr@dot. gov 2020). These numbers represent not only the drivers, but also include their passengers and any pedestrians who have died as a result of the negligence and recklessness of drivers distracted by mobile devices. The dangers that distracted drivers place not only themselves but also those around them is completely unnecessary. The dangers not only lie on the road but they also extend to after the crash takes place. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a8300a3637f3,20897B41AFB8,One of the other major issues that distracted drivers face is the financial costs incurred after the initial wreck. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+588f4ff15353,20897B41AFB8,"The people that suffer the most financial damage are the drivers, followed by their passengers, and then pedestrians involved in the accident. Some reason drivers suffer the most is because they are left paying for the damages to the cars and for personal injuries, not to mention their insurance premiums potentially increase. The passengers and pedestrians suffer because of bodily injuries and potential long term recuperation. While they likely do not have to pay for vehicle damages, if severe enough, injuries prevent them from performing their day to day activities and work functions, which may leave them unable to work and without money to survive. The law office of Tavss Fletcher states that ""the average cost for each death in a motor vehicle accident is $1,130,000"" and ""each nonfatal disabling injury is $61,600"" (""The Price Paid for Automobile Accidents and Injuries""). So the cost for the accident far outweighs the risk of texting or calling while they are driving, not to mention the potential risk of injury not only for themself but for everyone involved in the accident. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca209cce7abf,20897B41AFB8,"
+On top of the financial and physical pain these types of accidents cause, there is also the emotional pain of the victims and the victim's families. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5d990e79d307,20897B41AFB8,"When a victim survives and they are injured, they can't immediately go back to work, school, or their normal lives. They need to go to physical rehabilitation which causes strain on everyone involved. Along with this, there are mental disorders that develop after the crash, one of which is depression. According to the Myers Law Firm ""Some physical injuries limit victims' ability to work, exercise, and enjoy day-to-day activities like playing with their children. If you're suddenly unable to partake in activities that you used to enjoy because of pain or a debilitating injury, it's no surprise you may become depressed"" (Myers Law Firm 2020). The victims may have difficulty adjusting to a new ""normal"" caused by injuries. These injuries may have caused a lack of mobility or body function, which hinders them from enjoying typical family or personal activities. Things they loved to do in the past that could be spontaneous or done in a few minutes now require extra time and planning to accomplish. Another mental illness that could develop is Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). PTSD may make going back to their normal day to day lives very difficult. Often time people involved in wrecks will have flashbacks about it, sometimes triggered by being in a car, being near the wreck site or something completely unrelated. Not only is the physical and financial cost of such an accident steep, but the mental toll has a hefty cost. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0cc245e11dc,20897B41AFB8,"Aside from the mental, physical, and financial sides of the argument there is also the legal side of it. Many states are starting to realize the dangers of distracted driving and are prohibiting it, and if anyone is caught they will either be fined or sentenced to serve in jail for a short time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d47590043fe,20897B41AFB8,"One example of a state that has made using a mobile device while behind the wheel of a vehicle is Georgia. The hands-free law states that ""A driver cannot have a phone in their hand or use any part of their body to support their phone...A driver may not write, send or read any text messages, e-mails, social media or internet data content""(""Hands-Free Law""). The states understand that the use of mobile devices while operating a vehicle is dangerous, and they are starting to enforce that they need to get it under control. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c086180b20e5,20897B41AFB8,"The use of a mobile device should not be allowed while driving a vehicle. Some states are moving to make it illegal. The accidents cause high financial damage which supports the reasoning of the states to make it illegal. The many deaths, physical injuries and emotional strain that if inficts far outweighs any possible need for using a phone. The final reason that states are making it illegal to drive distracted is because of the high amount of crashes that it causes. It is because of all these factors that the use of mobile devices while behind the wheel of any vehicle should be completely and utterly prohibited. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+70d6e4610f05,20C01368FC3E,"Summer break is a time for everyone to decompress and relax after a long school year. Projects over break are stressful, especially teacher-designed ones. Breaks should be spent having fun and spending time with family/friends. Students work their butts of enough during the year and shouldnt have to do that over summer. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+690c9b7d12e8,20C01368FC3E,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+10c5d3d02855,20C01368FC3E,"it'll give students a chance to make the project chill, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0ab25d33e706,20C01368FC3E,"it will allow more independence for the students, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bfa21debc1cf,20C01368FC3E,it will have a better chance of making the students summer adventurous. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3e844a0bee7e,20C01368FC3E,"The one thing students ask of the most would be a laid back summer. Because of all the stress they endure during the year, students want a bit of time to reflect and relax. If students make their own projects they could make it very simple. Most may think of that as taking a shortcut through life, but in reality they do enough work as it is in school. If teachers made the projects, chances are they'd want to challenge the students a lot. When projects are teacher-designed students are less likely to complete it. To add on students wouldn't want to ruin their schedule with a boring project that their teacher designed; they'd want their project to be less time consuming during break. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+061d9642e529,20C01368FC3E,One key factor for students is a sense of independence. Students are growing older and majority of them want to do tasks on their own. Doing their own projects would give them that freedom. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5359e5f732de,20C01368FC3E,"The project could also be a way for them to boost their confidence in what they are capable of doing. It would be a great way for them to see how being independent with certain things is like. Student-designed projects may be a way for students to teach themselves responsibility. It would give them a greater aspect of being able to deal with time management skills. Furthermore they wouldn't be relying on their teachers for specific things such as: making a due date, setting up the project, making specific directions, etc. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c60681df89dd,20C01368FC3E,"Most students enjoy exploring over summer; and what better way to do it than through a project. Student-designed projects would allow students to create it however they want. Even if it's a group project or even one where they'd need to actually go somewhere. Teachers wouldn't make it all that interesting, they'd just add a few things to make it ""fun"" but not to where a student would get excited. If students want more time with friends and family, they could add things into the project to make that happen. Teachers are known as the ""fun killers"", so students would get the chance to take matters into their own hands and fix that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36f6b8bbfd91,20C01368FC3E,"Overall people may think teacher-designed projects are better because of teachers ""knowing what they are doing"", ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1ca6ae613c0a,20C01368FC3E,but that is not always true. It is good to let students take over sometimes. It is also a great way for teachers to see the potential for their students. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e60f15293de6,20C01368FC3E,Student- designed projects can show one's creativity and imagination. Teachers don't always get to see that side of students during the year. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+f7a5e689fa6d,20C01368FC3E,"To conclude it all students should be able to design their own projects to attain their independence, add some adventure to their break, and gain a relaxing summer break.                                                                   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a165afa5eb16,20D57DEC3EF5,"I think using a Facial Action Coding Systemin the classroom to identify the emotions of students is not okay, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+59d5d85646d1,20D57DEC3EF5,"Why? becuase some people want to express themselves of their feelings that has been done by others. But not such that. In fact, we humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" everday. For instance you can probably tell if a friend is feeling simply emotion by looking at thair face. But for some people painting portraits can help them express their feelings through painting. Sometimes people express their emotions through music by singing or making music. Then in the Mona Lisa, no one knows what feeling she is expressing and what is she feeling. For instance, some artists say she is happy but no one really knows what emotion she is feeling ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe38c88f6925,20D57DEC3EF5,"In conclusion, I think classrooms shouldn't use Facial Action Coding System to identify the expression of students an how they are feeling. But some people have hidden talents that they use to express themselves or their emotions. Also not many people icluding students express themselves through painting some use dancing, acting, making music, singing, cooking and their are many ways of expressing your emotions through many things. For instance people express themselves through writing books, but many people can understand their feelings that by reading their life as a book. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7ce471a8cd33,20D81D1BE1A6,"Yes, the use of Facial Action Codying Stystem would be very useful for students in the classroom. ",Position,Effective,,,
+377557a55679,20D81D1BE1A6,"Not only can this technology detect when a student is confused or bored, but it can change the lesson to grab the students' attention again, or to explain it in an another way. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e3e829595bc4,20D81D1BE1A6,"Along with this, this technology could introduce a lot more job intrest, hobby intrest, or just pure intrest among students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0b783745a00f,20D81D1BE1A6,"Lastly, this technology would be beneficial to students because it would give us a reason to be taught about the science of emotion, we could learn and go more into depth about our basic human body and mind and how easy emotions can show. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+7d8dcbe6751e,20D81D1BE1A6,"This technology can change lessons for kids who aren't understanding, or are just completley bored of the material being shown. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1cbba736bc56,20D81D1BE1A6,"This can greatly change a students grades from bad to good, along with make them look forward to coming to your class or school in general. From paragraph 6 the author stated, ""A classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" Ending the conversation with, ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor."" Another point which dosn't relate to the fact of changing around lessons for a student would be also in paragraph 6,""...if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different."" This technology can overall make a students lesson, web browsing, and understanding of materal a lot easier and it could greatly improve their work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d4e58ec7115c,20D81D1BE1A6,"Secondly, the FACS can show students a different range of technology that is fairly new ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f5cd4212856d,20D81D1BE1A6,"It could show some kids something they may be passionate for but never knew of, it could be a possible job intrest, a new hobby interest, anything at all. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+93fbfa5126af,20D81D1BE1A6,"The people using this technology are doing so many things, ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face;"" So they're not only using 3-D software but also, ""Using video imagery, the new emotion-recongnition software tracks these facial movements."" The people who are specializing in doing this kind of technology, are branching out in very large, and impactful ways. Many students could be interested in doing this, and sometimes if it's not in school and they don't hear of it. They can never find it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+91e358af81a9,20D81D1BE1A6,"Lastly, having this technology in our school would give us a reason to talk about the basic science of emotion. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+219f71d2b1eb,20D81D1BE1A6,"We can learn about our human bodies and why emotion is displayed so easily, and how it's displayed as well. ""According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them."" Our faces can move in multiple ways depending on the emotion we feel, as shown in paragraphs 7-8. Why does it do this? This technology can give us a valid reason to talk about the science of emotion more, and we can learn more about this as students or even as teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dad03cbc1630,20D81D1BE1A6,"Finally, either it be the fact that a lesson can be changed based off of if a student is bored or confused. Or that having this technology can show students a wider range of possible job choices, hobby choices, or just learning more about something out of pure intrest. Or lastly, because having this technology around us gives us a reason to talk about the science of emotion in depth. This technology could be extreamly useful, and impactful on students, if the software being used is good and has been shown to be correct. This could be a very good thing to have in schools that our students can use and to possibly even learn about. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f2f0ce6fc24f,20E41EFD4FB8,The author does a very good job of proving his point about the challanges of exploring Venus. He makes a few valid points and is very descriptive. I think he did a good job overall explaning his point. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ebed28eef27,20E41EFD4FB8,He starts off by talking about how Venus is a very similar planet to ours ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+230a4fd7d572,20E41EFD4FB8,"He says hat the two planets are so similar that people call Venus the ""sister planet to Earth"". He also makes the point that Venus may have held life at some point. He states that ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19d73c2df3ca,20E41EFD4FB8,"His next topic was about how we have already sent space crafts over to Venus. All of them, however, were unmanned ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a31bfc56e92,20E41EFD4FB8,"They were all unmanned because the pressure and heat of the planet would instantly kill the occupants inside the ship. Even without anyone in the ships, the spaceships were still crushed by the pressure of the planet. He states that ""no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours"". He then goes on to say that this is probably why no spaceships have touched the planet fr three decades. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae478f2a7fb7,20E41EFD4FB8,He goes on to talk about how NASA has been trying to come up with ideas on how to inhabit the planet with life. they came up with a few good ideas but the one that stood out to him the most was a bit interesting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b72a1446558d,20E41EFD4FB8,"He says that NASA wanted to try and get a blimp like spaceshi to float 30 miles above Venus' surface. at ths spot it isnt too hot or too dangerous and is almost perfect for life. the heat, however, would still be a whopping 170 degrees fahrenheit and we would be stuck in a thick cloud in CO2. He also states that even if we lived there, we wouldnt be able to photograph or video the surface to study it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+453315484a94,20E41EFD4FB8,"Overall he made a lot of valid points. I think that he made his point very clear and proved that attempting to explore Venus would be a challange. With its harsh conditions and unbearable heat, there would be no fun in exploring the planet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0db0527c1b72,20F9EE3FEC1F,"Authors that present a well-developed, convincing argument can have a large influence on their reader's thoughts. In the passage, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author explains the different reasons as to why Earth, as a whole, should further study the planet of Venus, alotting all its difficulties. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9585de902225,20F9EE3FEC1F,"While the kinks of being able to go to Venus are still being worked out, this author gives insight as to why this barren planet is still important. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5fe27ee65267,20F9EE3FEC1F,The first idea the author had was related to the atmosphere of Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92252c56a61f,20F9EE3FEC1F,"""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the coulds of higly corrosive sufuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."" In Paragraph 3, the author does not give a higly convincing argument. Humans need oxygen to live, so how is it expected for them to survive on a planet that has little to no oxygen? It is not possible to change the chemical makeup of an entire planet. The argument displayed by the author is not credible in any way and does not give any reason as to why one would want to continure research in this area. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c95b5228cd3,20F9EE3FEC1F,"The next problem that Earth faces in studying Venus is that temperatures on this planet exceed 800 degrees Fahrenheit, a temperature found nowhere on Earth ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6423711c9a94,20F9EE3FEC1F,"This temperature is beyond the maximun limit that human can edure, which leaves behind the compelling factor of wanting to study more of this sister planet. The author also states, "". . . and the atmospheric pressure is 9 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme that anything humans encounter on Earth."" If the conditions of Venus are so bad, why should we be expected to study more of this planet. Similar to the carbon dioxide in the air, there is no way to change the temperature and pressure of an entire planet. Once again, the argument given by this author is not convincing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bd9e8168aba7,20F9EE3FEC1F,The author uses an idea proposed by NASA for humans to study Venus ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b506a3077514,20F9EE3FEC1F,"They say that they could use hovering vehcles such as a blimp to fly over the planet, somewhere around 30 miles high. While 30 miles is a long way abover the planet, the temperature would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, which is not ideal for reseachers. ""Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" If studying a planet is as difficult as the author is saying here, then Venus should be abandoned because even if NASA was able to study it, there is obviously no way that the planet will ever be suitable to live on. The author's arguments so far have all been a lost cause. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bcae15553370,20F9EE3FEC1F,"The author does explain that Venus may have been previously similar to Earth-like conditions, including oceans to support forms of life ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0397a4d8179e,20F9EE3FEC1F,"He states that it has similar features to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters. While this may be too, Venus has come a long way in that it is no longer able to sustain life. Even if it previously was similar to Earth, that means that it has gotten worse over time, which says that from here on, it will continue to grow worse. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f5c23685895,20F9EE3FEC1F,"Proven by the author, Venus's conditions are far too extreme for the technology we have today. This planet is increasingly too dangerous to be explored, therefore the research toward it should be abandoned, and pushed more toward studying other plants, or even other solar systems in order to find another sutiable planet for humans to comfortably live on. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+20c0e467fcd4,211C17AD0F75,I think its ok so you can know how the person is feeling ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c8287d40dac2,211C17AD0F75,If you know how a person is feeling then you can react to them in a way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0df6ffdf90db,211C17AD0F75,"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. If your in a classroom and you don't have one of those (FACS) then one day a student can come in all calm in the from out of nowhere there's a fight. But with a FACS when that person comes in the room, and the computer scans the person and it shows that the person is angry. Now that the teacher knows that the person is angry an they can see if they can calm them down. In paragraph 6 it's says ""a classroom coomputer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d8a64de47f9a,216896F62055,"First,Professor. Thomas Huang of the beckman Institute for advanced Science at the University of Illinois working with
+
+Professor. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate which the proces begin when a computer constructs a 3-D computer Model of the Human face that contains all 44 major muscles in the model that must move like Human. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab63bb9f4dec,216896F62055,"Second,The Facial Expressions of some individuals often show varying degrees of expression and the new emotion-recognition software tracks facial movements in a real face or in the painted face if Mona Lisa. Each expression of a Human is being compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). In fact us Humans perform the same impressive ""calculation"" everyday. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+684f0be44e4c,216896F62055,"Third,Mona Lisa's Demonstration really intended to bring a smile on your face, For example: if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad will follow but if your frown the next ad will be different,which makes the classroom computer recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor and with the same technology it can be used to make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8ffca6952f2,216896F62055,"Last,Our Muscles called Orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's feet around your eyes, in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorious. But, to an expert faces don't lie; the muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b0cd38b95d4,216896F62055,"In Conclusion, The Theory of Emotion is about moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions,but it also may help produce them, And empathy may happen at some point of time when we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3f3d79837683,216A05AF987E,"Nick D'Alto's article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" describes the capabilities of new software called the Facial Action Coding System, and provides a few examples of its possible uses. In the text, the author states that the technology, which evaluates the movement of facial muscles to determine emotion, could be beneficial in places such as a classroom settting. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cbff9c159f07,216A05AF987E,"Using software such as the Facial Action Coding System could be valuable in a classroom setting as it could improve the quality of learning for students. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+578f2dd5b477,216A05AF987E,The new emotion-reading technology could help in the classroom as it could make sure students stayed engaged in the lesson. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f45e3d75aac0,216A05AF987E,"Often in school, students become bored easily, due to lack of attention long attention spans, uninteresting lessons, or boring teachers. This technology could help eliminate bordom. In the article, Dr. Huang states that ""a classroom computer could recognize when a student... [is] bored"" which would be beneficial, as it ""could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" This means that this technology could tell if students are bored, and could alert the teacher. If teachers knew when their students were loosing focus and becoming uninterested in the lesson, they could change it to bring students back on focus, which would improve the productivity and use of time in the classroom because teachers would not be wasting time teaching students who are uninterested, and therefore, likely not listening. By eliminating this bordom factor, teachers would be more effective with their teaching time, and students would recieve a better quality of learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b480775db20b,216A05AF987E,The technology could also help improve the quality of students' learning because it can make sure students are not confused ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e38c112905e,216A05AF987E,"Often, when teachers ask if everyone understands the material, students who do not understand, will be too emabrassed to ask for help, or the teachers, with such a large class, will not notice if one or only a few students are falling behind. Furthermore, in the article, Dr. Huang states that ""'most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication"" meaning that most communication is picked up in other ways, such as visually. Unfortunately, often in a classroom setting, teachers must face away from their students when writing on a white board at the front of the classroom, or in similar situations, which means that without the visual connection, much of the communication between students and teachers is lost. The new technolgoy could help with this problem, as it could identify students' emotions even when a teacher's back is turned, and thus could alert teachers and help them improve their lessons to fit their students' needs. It could also help evaluate emotions that teachers do not notice, such as if a student is confused, they may try to hide it. This new technology could identify these emotions and help the teacher make sure all of their students understand the material, which would lead to an improved quality of teaching and learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+67edbd940e73,216A05AF987E,"The quality of learning in a classroom setting could be improved by teachers knowing the emotions of their students, which would make new technology such as the Facial Action Coding System, valuable in a classroom setting. This technololgy would be beneficial because it could identify whether students are confused or bored, which would make class time more productive and interesting, as well as make sure all students understood the material. This would improve their quality of learning, and make school more meaningful. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+51d1d6ed1e04,218490FD2E1B,The facial action coding system has many promising applications ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f2d3f1202be4,218490FD2E1B,", Mona Lisa has 83% of happiness 9% disgust 6% fearful and 2% ssanger. According to some new computer software that can reconize emotion the sofware is the latest innovation from prof. Thomas Huang, of the beckman institute for advanced science at the unversity of amsterdam. The process begins when the computar constructs a 3-D computar model of the face: All 44 mayjor muscles in the model must move like human muscles movement of one or more muscles in the model is called an ""action unit"" then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologist, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS. Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristics movements of the facial muscle ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f92c6b8c6dc2,218490FD2E1B,I think i like the new technology that the person invented it can detect your emotins and feelings. And i doubt others can invent something like that ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+09c0643706b7,21B6AF900F82,The author believes Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers. There is lots of evidence to support the authors claim. I personally agree with the author that we should look into Venus more. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2152ab45479,21B6AF900F82,Venus could be suitable for humans ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+90a146301dfa,21B6AF900F82,"The author shows this by telling ""temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy condiotions but survivalbe for humans."" Venus can be suitable for humans, it just would be very difficult starting off. Soon enough humans would adapt to the hostile environment of Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+422d9853abc9,21B6AF900F82,Venus could have to be humanities future if we keep polluting Earth ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+875dc520df59,21B6AF900F82,"Venus could be suitable yet harsh, but still needs to be learned about a lot more. We still know only the bare minimum of Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fa0669b48ee4,21B6AF900F82,Venus is very hostile ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59cce5c60949,21B6AF900F82,"Humans would not be able to survive on an atmosphere that is 97 percent carbon dioxide. It's clouds are highly corrosive with sulfuric acid, and temperatures are averaged over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. It would take a very great amount of effort to make Venus a new home. But if it is studied more we may be able to make it a place to stay. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+332b3ccc7e4a,21B6AF900F82,"Overrall I think it would be smart to learn more about Venus. It could potentially be a new home. Venus seems to be almost as promising as Mars does right now, but still we need lots of information. The author had very good claims, and I agree with them. If we put more into studying Venus I believe it would help humanity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6a80936725cd,22049B234D6C,"""All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change"" (Rosenthal source 1) said Transportation of America official David Goldberg in Elisabeth Rosenthal's article ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars."" With air pollution, smog, and greenhouse gas emissions rising all around the world, officials have announced that cars are to blame. With this, many are resorting to making changes in their communities by offering alternate means of transportation and bringing homes and stores closer together. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+61e918f66cf5,22049B234D6C,The advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2a4280aea025,22049B234D6C,"fuel will no longer pollute the air, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0b07a55dcd22,22049B234D6C,"alternate transportation is available and cheaper, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5ccd3465352c,22049B234D6C,it would enforce goodwill and communionship. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+52396aa2e1b1,22049B234D6C,"With President Obama's issue to decrease the amount of air pollution caused by cars, many have realized that car usage is not as common as it used to be. If the number of cars on the road continues to deplete- ""and many sociologists believe it will-it will have benificial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants"" (Rosenthal source 4) says Rosenthal in her article ""The End of Car Culture."" By keeping track and trying to deplete the time you spend driving your car the trend of putting air pollution to an end will increase. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6259428e70e,22049B234D6C,"By using alternate means of transportation such as buses, trains, and car pooling services you are saving gas money and supporting community business'. There is a rise in car pooling that has ""facilitated more flexable commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work"" (Rosenthal source 4) says Rosenthal. As these changes manifest many people are chosing not to switch back to driving themselvs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe861cb25a03,22049B234D6C,a benifit of limiting our car usage can be found in the better communionship that will result as cities will make their stores closer together and communities more closley knit. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6d51b08dc06b,22049B234D6C,"In Bogota, Colombia people are practicing ""car-free days"" and relying solely on public transportation. As this happens author of article ""Care-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,"" Andrew Selsy, says ""parks and sports centers [are] bloom[ing] throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up"" (Selsky source 3). Other places implementing car-free districts will never hear the roars of engines drowning out the chirping of the birds or childrens laughter. Infact, stores and public transportation is stratigically placed a walking distance away thus promoting social and physical benifits (Rosenthal source 1). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+454035436275,22049B234D6C,"The advantages of limiting car usage include fuel will no longer pollute the air, alternate transportation is available and cheaper, and it would enforce goodwill and communionship. With greenhouse gasses rapidly circulating and polluting the globe it would be acceptional to decrease this by not driving as often. Furthermore, by using alternate transportation such as car pooling or taking a bus money is saved on gas and car repairs. Finally, goodwill and good social habits would increase as towns would become more closley knit as everything would only be a walk away. With this it we should limit our car usage to ""save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve saftey"" (Rosenthal source 4). ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+97f536f9da0f,22416450E0EF,"Summer break is the biggest part of the year that students look forward to. Students want to have fun with friends and just relax, however, students are still required to continue learning throughout their break in order to retain information they've learned over the school year. Consequently, students are assigned teacher-designed summer projects. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f650ee1df0b1,22416450E0EF,"Some people may say that teacher-designed summer projects are effective, however, student-designed projects are better ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2eae70655d98,22416450E0EF,it would be more enjoyable for the students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a76c2d81941a,22416450E0EF,it will have more diverse topics. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a331f8476891,22416450E0EF,"First of all, having students design their own projects would be a lot more enjoyable for students because they have the freedom to choose their own topics ",Claim,Effective,,,
+632b0893fce9,22416450E0EF,". For example, the famous filmmaker and entrepreneur Walt Disney was not always successful with his work. At the start of his career he drew little art work pieces for a small local newspaper company, although he wasn't able to profit from his drawings that much, he still loved his job because it was something he wanted and loved to do. It can be seen that people are able to go through tough times if they are able to express themselves freely. Another example would be is when my science class was assigned a group project and students had the freedom to do whatever they wanted to do. My group decided to do it on climate change, which wasn't very appealing to me at the time, but as I learned and dug in deeper into the topic, I found it more and more interesting which led to me being more educated in climate change and gaining new knowledge made it was more memorable. This shows that when students have the freedom to choose and design their own projects; it helps students learn something they never knew about, which leads to students being more educated. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5ce7f215919c,22416450E0EF,"Secondly, letting students design their projects will lead to more diverse topics. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+53c524bd2f48,22416450E0EF,"Students are always taught to follow a rubric which can be stressful; consequently, students are limited when it comes to expressing their thoughts and opinions. In fact, during my English class, students were split into groups and we were all assigned the same topic to debate about and we were also assigned which side to take on the topic. This lead to students being confused and frustrated because they didn't know what to talk about because they didn't agree with what they were assigned, which lead to the debate being very confusing and vague; students from all groups were stating the same basic reasonings with no interesting details. It can be seen that it's hard to describe or discuss about certain topics when there's no diversity of thoughts. On the other hand, during my history class, the whole class held a debate on a topic where students were given the choice to pick which side they wanted to take. As a result, students from both sides were able to share their thoughts and opinions on the topics, which led to students from both sides giving diverse, different, and interesting ideas and students were able to learn from each other. Every person is different and everyone has different thoughts that people can learn from one another. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b4d824b9a69,22416450E0EF,Some say that teacher-designed projects are better because teachers are more experienced and know what's better for the students ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b9018fb8ca6e,22416450E0EF,"however, that reasoning is flawed due to the fact that every student is different and some students need more freedom in education. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8ece97216c1f,22416450E0EF,"For example, studies have shown that when students are given work that's confusing or not enjoyable; they procrastinate until the due date and the scores and grades are often lower. However, when students are given the opportunity to choose their own topics and work on what they want to do, they take more responsibility and complete the task on time with a higher score. Teachers being more experienced than students may be true, but giving students a chance and letting them work on their own may show better results. Often times, students are too focused on grades and rubrics, which can be stressful and upsetting when they receive a bad grade for their work they thought was good, however, when students follow their own rules and knowledge it'll be more rewarding when they receive a good grade and it'll be easier for students to find what they lack and need to work on, to improve when they receive a bad grade. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+387a3399f2ba,22416450E0EF,"In conclusion, students should have the freedom to choose and design their own summer projects because it'll give the students a chance freely express themselves. Students today have a lot of information thrown at them during the school year and having to retain all that information throughout summer is very difficult, but having students forcefully research and learn about a topic they don't like would be very discouraging and not very effective. Learning is an important part of life, but students should still have the freedom to research and work on something they want to do.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ffd841c2c220,22715C8105CB,I agree with the author because it its one of our closest planet and it is most earth- like planet in our solar system ,Position,Adequate,,,
+121a7e8aba6c,22715C8105CB,the autor says venus long ago was most likely covered largely with oceans and could of supported various forms of life. if we ceould visit venus we could probably find fossils from there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43cd212e592c,22715C8105CB,"NASA is making a silicon carbide that could last for up to three weeks in such conditions that meaans eventually we will be able to visit venus and learn about how the planet turned into gas and NASA is trying to make parts that would be more resistant to venus as it states in the passage."" we are creating a system of mechanical parts tht could be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a27785fe260c,22715C8105CB,"in conclusion i do not the think the author wants to visit venus because it is way to hot to even try to land there if we did land there you would melt it says in paragraph 3 that the enviorment would crush a Submarine that is accustomed to dive in the deepest parts of our oceans. venus has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequrnt lighting strikes to any thing trying to land on its surface. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+39e86436357c,2275D39DC5AD,"In the article the author trlls how a new technolgy called the Facisl Action Coding System that identify human emotions. The software is used to ""calculate emotions"". They can caculate six basic emotions ""happiness, suprise. anger,disgust,fear, and sadness"". It can tell all of thoes things by your face movements and how you talk. Anyonw can tell if you are sad and dont want to be bothered so it shows emotion but if you ""put on a happy face"" it could accully make you very happy. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1e7112423399,2275D39DC5AD,The tecnology could help the student ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2973533c8a72,2275D39DC5AD,becuase it tells them whenthey are looking bored or sleepy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae7d69e56ff8,2275D39DC5AD,"Dr. Huang is predicing that the tecnology could have a ""effective human instructor ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a731f8fa8712,2275D39DC5AD,the tecnogly is very smart it could also make computer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ebdab1366d4,2275D39DC5AD,"In the passage they gave an example of a real face painted of ""Mona Lisa"" becuase in the picture she has a stright face and she shows ""no emotion"". But it is also made to put a smile on your face.
+
+The computer model of the face technology has to have a 3D face model and has to have ""all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles"". Humans ""preform the same impressive calcualtion everday"". everybody had diferent facal expressions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5793f2e8c0b6,2275D39DC5AD,In conclusion the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in the classroom is valialbe becuase they all need to know how there emotions are and how they are looking in a classroom or jsut on the daily basic. And they can also see what emotional are meaning at that tiem when they didnt. It aslo tells if someone has a real smile and a fake one. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3.066375E+075,2280836E512A,If i was a NASA scientist discussing the fase with someone who thinks it was created by aliens i would tell them that the face was not mad by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5968b6a70294,2280836E512A,because it could of bin made by dust and wind or a deid person from milions of years ago also it can be a rock formed as a face . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6aaa214acb67,2280836E512A,"
+first i think that the face could of ben made up of dust and wind along time ago ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e3d117056090,2280836E512A,"because we do not know what was in mars for a long period of time untill we invented satelights, rocket ships and space shutls next i say it could of also ben a deid person. one of the resons i say this is because in space a deid bode can not row or reprodus . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f8f8754d1e8,2280836E512A,last but not lest a rock could of den formed or a medeor crash thes are some of the things why i think it could not be aliens.            ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea2a7512ca9d,22E8627A3CB9,"The use of the facial software in class rooms could be a vital aspect in stopping and preventing tragedies such as school shootings,bullying,and possibly fights. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3fbb6b2c856f,22E8627A3CB9,In todays society is a key element on being able to read people's emotion to be able to determine how to approach the said person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68f6ea26515a,22E8627A3CB9,"Many people are able to tell when a peer is angry pr sad but some people just have a blank face. The use of the software could help teachers understand their students,which in turn can help elaborate people's triggers and can lead to a better day.""In fact, we humans perform this same impressive “calculation” every day.
+
+For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4de8a66c46f,22E8627A3CB9,"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea9387df056a,22E8627A3CB9,"Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions.
+
+His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. Perhaps Dr. Huang’s emotion algorithms are a different sort of “Da Vinci Code”)"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae83940cecf7,22E8627A3CB9,"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” Dr. Huang predicts. “Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+609aa99fae83,22E8627A3CB9,"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive—for video games or video surgery. “Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,” notes Dr. Huang. “So computers need to understand that, too.”Eckman has classified six basic emotions—happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness—and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you’re surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b45b80bf58e9,22E8627A3CB9,In conclusion the software should be implemented in todays classrooms .Althoughyour home PC can’t handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa’s smile. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+30f83464433c,22FBB7ED7597,The author suggests that studying Venus is worthy enough even though it is very dangerous. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0744c1a2c9a9,22FBB7ED7597,"The author mentioned that on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet . His solution to survive this weather that is dangerous to us humans is to allow them to float above the fray. A ""blimp-like"" vehicle hovering 30 or so miles would help avoid the unfriendly ground conditions . At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a04040ae994,22FBB7ED7597,"So not easy conditions, but survivable enough for humans. So this would help make the mission capeable of completing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1dfd9652c5bb,22FBB7ED7597,"He also mentions how peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penertrate the dense atmosphere making it hard to take photographs . They also cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d666a29f440,22FBB7ED7597,So many reaserchers are working on innovations that would allow their machines to last long enough to help gain some imformation of Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b75a2c938d03,22FBB7ED7597,They are working on other ways to study Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f99fd417d8c,22FBB7ED7597,"such as simplified electrnics made of silicon carbide that have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface . So far they have lasted for 3 weeks in these conditions which is more than enough time hopefully for them to be able to grab enough information. Their other project that they are working on is using an old technology called mechanical computers. They are powerful, flexible, and quick. Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+135516ad705f,22FBB7ED7597,He feels that studying Venus even though its dangerous is valuable ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+53a9ecd03144,22FBB7ED7597,"because of the insight they could gain about the planet itself but also becuase ""human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+54b11a94f284,22FBB7ED7597,I think the author supported his claim very well he explained why he thought it as nessary to go even though it is dangerous and he gave solutions to some of the dangers on Venus such as sollution to the heat and ways to actually help gain evicence and imformation on Venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd4532a1ad4e,22FD17FB1BEB,"How would you like to do a boring project on your summer break? Doesn't sound fun, does it? Schools believe that during the summer students need to actively learn. They ensure students continue learning by giving them summer projects. The matter at hand is; whether these projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed. It is the students project, so why shouldn't it be designed by them? In most cases, teacher-designed projects are very detailed and include many parts, the teachers expect too much from the students. A student-designed project can ensure interest in the project, teacher-designed projects become boring and there's a lack of interest. During summer break many students will go on vacations or visit family, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+913c1b0fc562,22FD17FB1BEB,having the students design the projects assigned can allow them to take into account the time they have available. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+04533a93f27f,22FD17FB1BEB,Teacher-designed projects are very intricate and the teachers expect too much from the students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3255996da2e4,22FD17FB1BEB,"Teachers have high standards. High standards can be good during the school year but for a summer project this can become very stressful. There are a plethora of components to a teacher-designed project, research, citations, outlines, rough drafts, and countless more. These projects force students to push themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+276b5e0d57b8,22FD17FB1BEB,Many might argue that its good for students to push themselves ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+46c1b77bb57b,22FD17FB1BEB,but it is summer break after all and students have been pushing themselves for about ten months. These students are tired and adding stress to their vacation is cruel. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+3a911a26ae33,22FD17FB1BEB,"Doing a project you're uninterested in can be very bland and boring. Teachers don't think about how uninteresting a topic or project can be to a student. Not having interest in a topic can be very detrimental to a students grade and the effort they put into the project. The same reaction can come from a boring class, students will start to loose focus, dread doing the work, or not put in any effort. I've personally experienced doing a project I had no interest in. I subconsciously procrastinated which lead to turning it in very late. I could not focus on the task and was drowning in work by the time it was due ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+24dc160584c1,22FD17FB1BEB,If a student were to designed the project they could choose a topic they were genuinely interested in. This would set them up for success and they could have fun learning something new. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9c945aa7fb39,22FD17FB1BEB,"Summer break is commonly associated with spending time with family and going on vacations. This is the case for most students. Giving students a long, details, mandated project is time consuming and takes away from their vacation. As a child of a divorced couple, my summers are filling with traveling to see my dad and spending time with him. I've personally experience having a summer project that I had to take time out of seeing my Father to do, which was upsetting because I only see him once a year. It's students like me who would love the chance to design their summer projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cccd13ad6989,22FD17FB1BEB,Given the chance to design their summer project students can ensure for themselves that it will not take away from their own plans and it will encourage them to finish it in a more timely manner. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bfaa493af812,22FD17FB1BEB,"Some schools assign students summer projects to assure they continue to learn during their vacation. These projects should be designed by the students. The projects should be student-designed because teachers have high standards. Due to these high standards their projects require students to push themselves when all year that what they've been doing. Lack of interest plays a huge role in many teacher's projects. Teachers aren't doing their best to assure that their projects spark some aspect of interest in their students. Having no interest in a project can cause the student to procrastinate and not do their best. Lastly, students have complicated schedules in the summer, many go away on vacation or spend time with family. Having a teacher designed-project that's time consuming can take away from their valuable time. Letting students design the project can ensure they will have enough time to work on it and will encourage them to finish it earlier. Student-designed projects can benefit the student immensely in multiple ways, where as a teacher-designed project will let them down and cause unnecessary stress. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a2225a4bfcd3,231A89552BD3,"In 2006 a trend began to grow in Europe, United States, and other places around the world to seporate auto use and the suburban life in to a movement called ""smart planning."" Most of the greenhouse gases emissions are up too 12 percent and is climing to greater than 50 percent in the United States and in Europe. Most of our development after World War II has be n centered  on the car or other means of transport. 80 percoent of laws have to highways and only 20 percent to other transport in the United States.
+
+Many efforts in the past two or three decades have maade cities denser, and better for walking, planners and now taking the concept tho the suburbs. Homes to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile have to be advanced experimentin some low-car suburban life. the reason the usages of cars and other transportation would help the world and the the residents around you.
+
+If there only 80 percent of appropriation have by law for highways and only 20 percent on other transport because lager role in a six-year federal tranaportation bills that are being put throw to be checked and aproved. The laws they have on transportantion and other means is to reduse the effects of the greenhouse effects that are happening are the world.
+
+For the third stright year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis alound to dive during the day in countries around the world to reduce smog and greenhouse effects that happen. which if you think about the ideas that ae being share around the world with other countries the world is be comung less likely to be effected by the grren huse effects around the world.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d43c387afa7d,231FDA202B25,"Do you remember the space trip to Mars? Well, another debate is brewing: Should we go to Venus or not? There are two perspectives on this issue. They are the people that want travel Venus (the author), and the people that don't want travel to Venus. There are two inherant issues too. They are the need for futher space exploration, and safety ",Lead,Effective,,,
+daa9e265c16b,231FDA202B25,"The author has provided enough information on both sides of the argument, but he thinks that studying Venus is a ""worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents."" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a18a11cd7175,231FDA202B25,"The people wanting to travel to space believe that we need to go to Venus because it is the planet closest to Earth, in characteristics and in distance. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fa905b24ef6f,231FDA202B25,"There have been attempts to go the Venus, but everytime the spaceship lands it only survives for a few hours ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bbfe3ab41560,231FDA202B25,"They believe that we need to get up on Venus and study it. There is only so much we can do from Earth, and right now it's not enough. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+03ab9332ffd1,231FDA202B25,The author has a lot of evidence supporting the need for space exploration ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a87d6087b8a5,231FDA202B25,"such as ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9704692570c,231FDA202B25,The author beleive that all of the risks he list in the article doesn't matter becayse we need to take risks sometimes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+12da02571846,231FDA202B25,"The first inherant issue, according to people who don't want to explore Venus, is also a vital part of the arguement. They believe that we have already tried going to Venus, it failed, and why try again. They believe that we have enough information from what we can do on Earth, why do we need to know everything in the universe? They believe that we have already found enough information that we need to know. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a5856db62db,231FDA202B25,"The second issue is safety. According to NASA, they have a solution for getting a spaceship to Venus carefully and safely. ""Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" (paragraph 5). NASA has a soultion for the safety issue that was recently brought to their attention. The people who want to go and explore Venus now believe that this is one of the final steps toward actually getting off of the ground. If NASA trains astronauts well enough, tries to simulate the conditions on Venus, and everything works well; there is noting holding them back. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7fe41fb45edf,231FDA202B25,The author expresses his support for the innovation NASA invented. The author thinks that this the object of the future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e7dae2acc8c,231FDA202B25,"The second issue, according to the people who want to stay grounded on Earth, is important for both sides to recognize. The people in the second perspective say it is not safe to go to Venus. We have tried it unmanned, and the unmanned spaceship counldn't live there for longer than a few hours, so it is too dangerous. ""On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth..."" (Paragraph 3). This quote helps support the second perspective for wanting NASA to kept its space ships from going to Venus. As the quote says, Venus is a very dangerous planet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e9bdb6ade89f,231FDA202B25,"In conclusion, the arguement is still ongoing, and doesn't seem to have a clear answer. I believe the stasis lies between finding a need for going to Venus, that isn't just the need for exploration, and a proven safe way to get and stay on Venus. The two perspectives are the author and the people opposing the author. The two issues are is there a need for exploaration and the safety of going to Venus. Therefore, with all the evidence provided to you, you can make a clear decision about if you want NASA going to Venus, or if you want NASA to stay grounded, but the author believes that you should side with him in support of Venus exploration. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bf6383985100,2321FAC1E823,"Summer break can lead to a fallback in students' learning from the previous year. In order to combat this problem, many schools have projects for the students over summer break to ensure that students maintain the skills that they learned in school. Some of these projects might require a lot of work, while others are less labor intensive. However, one thing is true for all of these projects. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3abe170d29e6,2321FAC1E823,They should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5d945570740a,2321FAC1E823,because this insures that the students will be engaged with the project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15e1d321ed87,2321FAC1E823,", gives teachers a better understanding of what students are passionate about, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3b0379d85f5,2321FAC1E823,is the most fair way to give students work over a break. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4dd1ae129e4,2321FAC1E823,Having students design their own projects will ensure that the project is something that the students actually enjoy doing. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ee184f2c93e6,2321FAC1E823,"Firstly, because they have choice in what they do, the students will be able to pick a subject or manner of presentation that they are excited about. If the teacher were to assign the same project to every student without allowing the students to have any say in what they actually end up doing, there would defiantly be students who are not interested in the project. Secondly, the students will also understand the project better. The students will have designed their own project, so they will know exactly what the outcome is supposed to be like and how to get there. Many projects are hard for students because they are not actually aware of what they are intended to do, so by allowing the students to design their own project, the school ensures that the students will completely comprehend it. Lastly, having the project be designed by students means that the students will be given more opportunity for creativity. Because the students more liberty over their project, they will be able to use more of their own unique ideas in the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+268726cf4369,2321FAC1E823,"
+Allowing students to design their own project is also better for the teachers ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a013f1579dba,2321FAC1E823,"First of all, the teachers responsible for grading the project will be given an opportunity to better understand their students before the school year ever starts. This understanding is because students are allowed to express themselves more through a project they designed themselves. Secondly, the teachers will not have to worry about making different projects for different levels of students, or about having to make a project that will interest many different types of students because the students will be responsible for making the project work for their level of understanding and interests. Lastly, the teachers will be provided a time to learn things that they would not have a chance to learn otherwise. This is because the students are given the opportunity for creativity, so they may choose to do a project about something that a teacher may have know previous knowledge of. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+835573461b6a,2321FAC1E823,Allowing students to design their own summer projects is a more fair way to assign work over the summer holiday. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d6c22de61d93,2321FAC1E823,"To begin, the students have been completing teacher designed work all school year, so it is only fair to give the students a break and allow them to design their own projects. Additionally, the projects are assigned as work over the summer, so they should not feel like the same work that students are being assigned all year long. Because the students have been working very diligently over the year to complete many different types of assignments from teachers. It would not be fair to the students to essentially continue that trend of assignments into the vacation. Finally, a student designed projects allows for more flexibility. This flexibility allows the students the opportunity to create a project that will be conducive to a busy summer schedule. Many students have to travel or go to summer camps, so they mightn not be able to complete to work which a teacher who does not know the summer plans of a students designs. However, it the student designs their own project, they will be able to make it work with their summer schedule. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d09d77c3ac3,2321FAC1E823,"If a school assigns a summer project to their students, the project should be student designed. there re many different ways to continue learning when formal school is on a break, but a student designed project will allow for creativity, flexibility, and be better for teachers as well as students. Above all, schools should focus on educating students in a way that allows them creating and ensure that they are passionate about what they learn, if not students will never develop a life long love of education. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+acac2f0c3afc,2327F7A3128C,"The author supports the idea of studying Venus in a descriptive way.
+
+Have you ever wanted to or at least have learned about the other planets in our solar system? Do you know what Venus is? In my opinion I believe that learning more about another planet like Venus is worth knowing about. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+eaefb96a3479,2327F7A3128C,"he's giving us details about our focus, Venus. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ae75316662c6,2327F7A3128C,He explains that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet in the solar system even though the one planet being close to the sun is Mercury. This is something unique to say about Venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a67555785863,2327F7A3128C,the author supports the idea of studying Venus despite the dangers of it because he's being descriptive about Venus and explains more details about it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+797a1de01456,2327F7A3128C,"he says,"" Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ed1f18bfdf66,2327F7A3128C,This is something interesting to learn about Venus and thats how well the author supports the idea of studying Venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+092b883ee764,2352FF50900C,"Nine out of ten students always say that most projects should be based on what they want to do, so it is not as dull as doing a teacher assigned on a specific topic. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fb909fd4fe66,2352FF50900C,Teachers do have some great ideas when it comes down to projects but some students can show more creativity when they can decide on the project they want to work on. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+137d32b94713,2352FF50900C,Students also can learn more from a topic they chose for the project for that particular class because they go out to find more information about the topic they think they might enjoy. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+248993ac2f7c,2352FF50900C,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+34831ae940c9,2352FF50900C,it shows more creativity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+944c88d3db61,2352FF50900C,"it shows their learning abilities, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4aab8f6417eb,2352FF50900C,it allows the student to pace themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9ab44e228839,2352FF50900C,When a teacher assigns a project their are usually some type of regulations they must follow for the project and you are only allowed to talk about specific topics. This for students does not allow for creativity because they will only follow what the teacher's checklists has so they can get the best grade possible. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ad08a7d78f9,2352FF50900C,"While yes, teachers usually assign projects so a student does not go off topic, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+92bbe1cbe8f4,2352FF50900C,but this can be easily fixed by simply showing some topics they can use but not forcing the topics on the students to use it and also allow students to find something about that topic or something that can relate to that topic. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d654ce27e576,2352FF50900C,Student-designed projects allows the students to make the most effort out of the topic they chose because the student shows that is the topic the student wants to talk about ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f5dd68f6ea4e,2352FF50900C,it is like a sport most professional sports player do not play a sport they do not like. Players play a sport where the player can see the most effort from themselves or which sport allows the player to show the most creativity in that sport. Like Messi named as the best soccer player in the world because of his creativity with the ball and all the effort that is put into every game. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb392c230688,2352FF50900C,"When it comes down to projects the teacher is always looking for what they learn from a project that student worked on but most students do not really learn well about the topic because the student did not want to learn about that topic it was given to them by the teacher. So, they will go on to just read something the student finds online and just copies most of the information about what that student read and make something similar. When a student is allowed to pick a topic they have to find information about that topic and will try harder to make it one of their better projects for themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25212280c666,2352FF50900C,"While yes, the student can use online sources and copy information from that source ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+75d769995790,2352FF50900C,they will try harder to explain it in their own words because that is the top the student wanted to talk about and wants to make an effort to show what they are capable of doing when the student is allowed to pick an idea for their own project. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b697421976bc,2352FF50900C,During a project a lot of planning ahead must come to mind the student will have to rush the projects as they would if it had deadlines for each couple of weeks. This allows the student to pace themselves and not feel that their project was rushed and they are not just putting all the work in one day. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+82bdffce496e,2352FF50900C,most students during projects tend to feel rushed because they feel they are not given enough time to do it while yes most students could still possibly finish the project last minute the overall feeling of planning ahead can help them to show hoe much work they put into the project everyday. A student tends to be a big procrastinator so when they pace themselves it allows the student to see if they can take a break for a day or not. When we look at adult projects they prepared to explain the topic because they plan accordingly and they pace themselves so they are not stressing out too much for their project. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6369e7e42d2f,2352FF50900C,"While yes, a teacher-designed project may be good for a student, a student-designed project is much better because it can show people great creativity, it allows a student to learn better, and it allows the student to better prepare themselves. Most students tend to see that their designs help them more because it shows they put more effort into their projects to allow a teacher to see where they are at. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1fbc9f7ccd5d,236C5B5C92CB,"The average person uses their phone many times a day whether it be consciously or not, we as a people always have access to our own devices. The problem with people using their phone is when to use it and how to use it properly. When inside of a vehicle there should only be a bare minimum of use to your phone. Whether that reason would be an emergency call or even doing simple things like using the maps application. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+87ef57ac2ec1,236C5B5C92CB,"All in all, humans as a whole should be able to use their phones but only to an extent. ",Position,Effective,,,
+52c993214c35,236C5B5C92CB,"The use of a phone in a car could be proven to be fatal but there are good reasons to use said phone, only in certain situations. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4a6c0cc55ed5,236C5B5C92CB,One of the reasons would be that to use your phone to get your way through areas you have no idea how to get through or using your phone to find your way home from a place you have no knowledge on. The downside is that when the person glances at the phone to see where to turn or make a specific move they lose the focus on the road for a split second which could be fatal. Sometimes the use of a phone all depends on what kind of person it is. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+688e763ef9fb,236C5B5C92CB,The person themselves also plays a big role in the use of cellphones in the car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+04ba4fb54840,236C5B5C92CB,"The person could be a maniac when it comes down to how they use their phone, some people can't even live without it because they are so connected to it, for those specific people who have those kinds of issues when it comes down using their phones they should not be able to use their phone at all because they would then get distracted by the other uses. The amount of sheer will they would need to not get distracted by those other things would be entirely on them but in the mean time they should have no reason to use their phone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+375dab1a0328,236C5B5C92CB,Phones play a big role in people's lives and it even saves them sometimes but the use of a phone is dangerous when the person is distracted on their phone ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e2d15ddcedad,236C5B5C92CB,"A second could save them from a life threatening accident. The amount of people that are in car accidents that involve phones is 26% in 2014. When the person is using their phone they are putting themselves and other people at risk on the road. According to the National Safety Council, the use of cell phones when driving leads to 1.6 million crashes annually. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f90c6f57d1a4,236C5B5C92CB,Texting while driving would be the biggest issue when it comes down to the use of a cell phone. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1f4725707346,236C5B5C92CB,"According to the NHTSA, driving while texting is six times more dangerous than driving drunk. Also texting while driving is now the lead cause of teen deaths in the USA, more than 3000 teens die each year alone as a result of sending a test message to somebody while they are in the use of a car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bb0209e82447,236C5B5C92CB,"The amount of consequences for just the use of a phone is just not enough, is the phone as important as the person's life? It should never come down to that question because your life is way more valuable than sending a text to someone while driving.                                   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a0fffd4654e0,23701C1FBDD2,I claim for the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be1a8fa18ccf,23701C1FBDD2,"one it carries code to help it detect certan emotions in the human face, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4d983d3bb11,23701C1FBDD2,"according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emostions, but also may even help produce them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6e9d448e6ac,23701C1FBDD2,One it carries code to help it detect certan emotions in the human face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+480f3af222f6,23701C1FBDD2,"Also the code can be kept for years, and would only need to to updated so we won't need to have multiple people tring to tell others how their facial expressions tells hows they are feeling. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+660173660df8,23701C1FBDD2,"Two according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emostions, but also may even help produce them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+37dd05bef5e9,23701C1FBDD2,"A esample of this would be the classic of ""put a smile on your face"". 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+82bd3bd3ba44,23701C1FBDD2,"In conclusion, I claim for the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. To support the claim here's to esamples, one it carries code to help it detect certan emotions in the human face, and two according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emostions, but also may even help produce them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6025065dd80e,238483C3AEFC,"In today's world, students are filled with many emotions, some too difficult for even parents to decode. The rollercoaster of feelings that a teenager endures in a day is confusing and complex. But with newly found technology, it may be easier now for the emotions of students' to be understood and assisted, if needed. The revolutionary Facial Action Coding System allows computers to scan and analyze the feelings of a human, alive or painted, and is a very valuable tool to comprehend student's emotional expressions. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+56cdbb222ec0,238483C3AEFC,This highly advanced technology is able to serve a multitiude of purposes that will foster an improved learning environment for students. ,Position,Effective,,,
+83215bd953bc,238483C3AEFC,"Because of this new and itelligent technology, doctors and others are able to read emotions of people in a way never previously possible. This brilliant computer ""constructs a 3-D computer model of the face"" (3). including all major muscles. With the ability to do so, this computer scans and creates a human face and, based on the position of the muscles, is able to determine the distribution of emotions felt at that moment by a person. Tested with the Mona Lisa, this model ""can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face"" (4). By comparing the chosen face against an emotionless one, this advanced techonology allows the ability to use muscle positions to analyze the feelings of a person ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cee87ecf467a,238483C3AEFC,"The ingenuity of the computers provide the resources and ability to decode complex human emotions and, in turn, will be able to be utilized in methods that will add to the betterment of society. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1bb4b9c4e28a,238483C3AEFC,The Facial Action Coding System will foster a more positive learning environment for students by adapting their online experience to their emotions. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e7b0167a7e4e,238483C3AEFC,"If implemented in daily computers, this technology will revolutionize the environemnt and usage of the Internet. Because this technology can map emotions, ""if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different"" (6). With the implementation of this technology, students will be able to influence which advertisements and pages appear on their screen. This will reduce their impatience on the computer, and actually stay focused on the task at hand, rather than getting frustrated and walking away. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2746f1781a6f,238483C3AEFC,"With the ability to control the pages on their computer screen, students will feel empowered and influential, giving them confidence and increasing their work ethic. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0619ea66dd87,238483C3AEFC,"With an increased work ethic, students will remain productive and efficient with their time and materials. The content of the student's lesson can also be adapted based on their emotional behavior. Dr Huang, the innovator of this technology, describes that at school, ""'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c483c8cd2dd,238483C3AEFC,"By allowing the computer to customize the lesson, students will stay more engaged, as the content they are learning is one that they enjoy. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2f684eaaae15,238483C3AEFC,"Students will find pleasure in learning the subjects that interest them while also learning about other less-interesting subjects in a more captivating manner. The innovative technology serves to better a student's learning environment, keeping them engaged and interested in the content. Schools will notice increased success rates and knowledgable students. By providing students with the chance to customize the method in which they learn, school will be more enjoyable and students will stay committed to their education. The emotion-analyzing software gives students this chance and will greatly impact the way they learn and the committment to their education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+054b206cdf88,238483C3AEFC,"The highly inteliigent Facial Action Coding System a valuable asset for students in a classroom, as it fosters an enjoyable and captivating learning environment that will shape the students' commitment to school. This advanced software analyzes the movement of a human's facial muscles, comparing it to an emotionless one, and determines the percent distribution their feelings. This innovative software provides students with the ability to customize the pages and lessons on the computer, giving them control over their method of learning. Students with this ability will feel captivated by their learning, as they are in control and can decide how they learn. The development of a desire to learn is crucial for school-aged children so that in the future, they will continue on to further educate themselves and expand their knowledge. This facial
+
+-analysis technology provides schools with the ability to create a captivating learning environment for students that will motivate them to stay committed to their education and reach their goals. While this new technology provides a bounty of benefits to many, assisting students in the achievement of their hopes and dreams holds the most value. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a751f6cecb8c,23968A5EA064,"It would be awsome to identify human emotions,and knowing what students feel in class can be really useful. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+11e017aceee2,23968A5EA064,I think the new technology that reads emotional expressions of people can be useful in schools. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8407f0affac7,23968A5EA064,"The teachers will be able to know when the students are bored, in the article it said ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" it let's the teacher know by the students emotions that the lesson is boring or the lesson is not understandable for them. The new technology can help teachers make their plan lessons more fun and understandable and if the schools of all around the world uses the new technology it would be lot easier for the teachers to make the students be more focus on school and the lesson, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae61c64c3a04,23968A5EA064,"not only the technology can help schools it can also help people with their business, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11861fcd156e,23968A5EA064,but that's not the point ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7e1ac42877d,23968A5EA064,the point is that school's should start using the new the technology to help students stay in school and helped them to stay focus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d58e375b96b,23968A5EA064,But not only it helps during class time it can also help outside of school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59d7412ae009,23968A5EA064,"if the student's play sports the coches can know when the student is sad, tired, happy,or angry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b9eacc8e394,23968A5EA064,So I think having the new technology in school can be really helpful and useful for everyone but most likely the teacher's. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d1a64f0eedec,23982EC8FF86,In this short story the authoer is sayiing thet it is not woth you time to study venus. it not with the time but it is a star that shines bright inthe sky at nigh time ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+83ced09922b9,23982EC8FF86,"The author said ""the value of returning to venus seems indisputable, but what are the opitions for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive"". it not safe to send to someone int to space to venus becasue they do not know if they will be able to get them back to earth safely. for other reason, "" NASA's possible solution to the hostile condititons on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the roiling venusian landscape. with means that venus landscape it not good for people to be up ther on it surface, scientist do jnot know if there is right oxygen on that planet for humans to breath. With that
+
+""NASA is working on other approaches to study venus"", because they are now thinking that it not safe for them to send humans upp to space to get data for them because they don't know what it like on that planet or how the weather , the surface is for humans to be on it. NASA is goimg to be useing technology with they call "" mechanical computers"" to studdy the planet here on earth. but venus is now called"" the evening star brightest points of light in the night sky"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aad7ac543744,23AA5F45C05B,"Taking participation in the Seagoing Cowboys program is more of a different world then an adventure! This program helps you think of the people in need and how much you have helped them. Participating in this fun program is a great idea! Just imagine... riding on a boat, mist spraying, cooling you off after a long day herding animals. You have the benefit to see and tour many places that you have never seen before! ",Lead,Effective,,,
+48dc8cb93e70,23AA5F45C05B,We all need to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f60d2d06544d,23AA5F45C05B,The Seagoing Cowboys program is a great oppertunity to help those in need to recover their food supplies. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed70d8ea075d,23AA5F45C05B,"Doing this can help you be more aware of the people in need and help you know that you have been great help to them. This program hires men to take care of the horses, cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. This can make you come closer to the animals and let them know that you care very much for them! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f5acc26e25b,23AA5F45C05B,"Not only can you help, but this job does inquire some fun! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+384e683156d3,23AA5F45C05B,"You have the benifit to see and tour special landmarks and places that you have never seen before! It is quite an adventure! It is an unbelievable oppertunity to see all kinds of sites (especially on the job!).
+
+On board, you can also find time to have fun! When you are on return trips after the animals are unloaded, you can play many games such as baseball, volleyball, and table-tennis in the empty holds where the animals stay. Fencing, reading, whittling, fun games, and boxing make some boat trips exciting! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+551c9819d1f9,23AA5F45C05B,"Overall, taking part in the seagoing Cowboys program is an excilent oppertunity! It is more of a new world rather then just an site-seeing adventure! Taking part in this activity would make you feel better about helping not just your community, but citizens beyond your community, too! Helping those who need your support is quite the heroic thing to do!   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c7ad71ebc762,23AB013DC336,There are many reasons to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9d0068013d3a,23AB013DC336,You will have many adventures if you join. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d68a25353f9,23AB013DC336,"Will delivering food, supplies, animals, and more you can go sightseeing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e20cc415a632,23AB013DC336,You get to explore the vast oceans. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee82ccf62311,23AB013DC336,When your Seagoing Cowboy you can have many adventures. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a5753145560,23AB013DC336,It can be on land or sea. You can have an adventure different countries with your free time when your finished your delivery with time to spare. The boat you travel on can even hold the beginning of an adventure. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+673f02458699,23AB013DC336,Every country you will go to will most likely have exotic sights. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+136230bf410f,23AB013DC336,Sightseeing is something that can make you glad you toke up the job. The things you could see are things that you probably won't see at home. These sights can also teach you something about the country ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+02e02f3a8dc6,23AB013DC336,Exploration is usually the best part about this job ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12d4a70d7552,23AB013DC336,"Exploring countries, towns, and cities is something you definetly should do on this job. You can even explore the ship. While exploring you can bring a friend to experience it with you. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+75a3580655c8,23AB013DC336,"I hope these reasons are good enough to make you join. Some people don't want to commit to the hard work envolved. You're not being forced to join. It's your decision. There is work envovled, but at the end of the day it's all worth it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9e398dea1657,23C653E16CC8,"Venus is the second planet in the solar system from the sun that precedes Earth in the planetary order. This planet is often called Earth's ""twin"" and the ""Evening Star"" of the universe because of its brightness and relative similarity to the Earth. In the article, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author presents facts and figures that one could use to determine whether studying Venus would be an advantageous pursuit even though it would not be very safe. The author focuses more on the drawbacks of exploring Venus, hence the title of this work. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8b543ad23fbe,23C653E16CC8,The author does not strongly support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit due to his extensive reasearch on its toxic living conditions but does acknowledge the benefits of its accessibility from Earth. ,Position,Effective,,,
+aae9ec3d1111,23C653E16CC8,"Compared to Earth, the author has found that Venus in less less survivable for humans. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+924bf72d3f77,23C653E16CC8,"In the early years of space industry, numerous spacecraft have embarked on missions to the planet, but they were not able to return home. Unlike Earth, Venus has an atmosphere that is ""almost 97percent carbon dioxide"" with a surface temperature averaging ""over 800 degrees Fahrenheit"" and an ""atmospheric pressure [that] is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet""(Paragraph 3). Due to these extreme differences in temperature, pressure, and air content, Venus would be fairly inhospitable for humans. Usually when NASA launches missions to other planets they are trying to find alternatives habitats for the human race in the event that they cannot survive on Earth. If humans will not be able to withstand the conditions of Venus it is no longer a good option; therefore, it is not worth looking into since the author provides evidence that Venus would not be a useful living environment in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+062afcc938ba,23C653E16CC8,"However, the author has also found that studying Venus could be beneficial considering its proximity and similar geographical features to Earth. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+93bca4d6e6be,23C653E16CC8,"The Earth comes right after Venus in the solar system, making it fairly close given the long time frame of space travel. Astronomers have discovered that it was also previoulsly one of the ""most Earth-like [planets]"" as it ""was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life"" (Paragraph 4). Venus also ""has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters"" (Paragraph 4). In the event that Venus became a viable option for humans to inhabit when Earth collapses (as mentioned earlier), humans would have already been exposed to some of the landscape there. Although this would make Venus more assimilable, its similarity to Earth does not outweigh the dangers that still come with the planet being an unknown land changing from its previous state. With this evidence the author provides an advantage to exploring Venus, but it does not hold up against the established points about Venus' overall uninhabitability. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+370578bd0c97,23C653E16CC8,"Throughtout the article, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author presents infomation for exploring Venus being both beneficial and harmful, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+aa19f6a313f5,23C653E16CC8,but he elaborates more on the reasons pointing to the dangers that Venus poses. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+4b0c17c52cbd,23C653E16CC8,"Compared to current conditions of Earth, Venus does not possess the necessary qualities that would make it a valuable reserve for potentially sustaining human life forms. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+04f6724f9528,23C653E16CC8,"The author is better able to address the disadvantages of studying Venus because of the extensive research revealing the planet's present volatile state instead of benefits from its similarity to Earth. Therefore, the author fails to thoroughly prove Venus' worthiness of exploration. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aacb4731e3f5,2414D2AF4D56,This storie is about the challeng of exploring Venus. The auhor talked how venus is closest planet in earth ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a030392f3a0e,2414D2AF4D56,The author support the idea by showing us how studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6c66acec872,2414D2AF4D56,in the story the author talked about how studying venus is worthy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+82a62866a858,2414D2AF4D56,"In the story the said ""venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our scholar system. The value of returning to venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe scientifically productive. This quotes revals that venus is worthy because people use for a lot things such as going to missions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+660b5b8f1d4a,2414D2AF4D56,In the article the author taked about how venus is pursuit. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e1709a2b79f8,2414D2AF4D56,in the article the the author said NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions o the surface of venus would allow scientitis to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. Ths quotes means thta venus is pursuit because is halping people wiht the electronic such as vehicule. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dd3d3c367626,2414D2AF4D56,In the story the author talked abouth how Venus is despite in danger. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b95a318f181,2414D2AF4D56,"In the storis the author said"" Beyond high presure and heat, venusian geogoly and weather presentadditional impedimants like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lihgtning strikes to probes seeking to lead on its surface. By comparing, system that use mechenical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat,and other foces"". This quotes mean that Venus is despite in danger because it barley causes dager like other planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08d603837de9,2414D2AF4D56,the author support the idea by showing us how Venus is a worthy pursuit despite in danger. In this storie the author talked how venus plante is different from the other planet in the earth surface. The author also talked about hoe Venus don't cause volcanoes and earthquakes.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c5231cde0a1d,2450993EB016,I disagree with the value of using this technology to read students emotional expression ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0c039d074903,2450993EB016,a picture may be susposed to make you laugh but it only shows what the computer can do. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+77140ceb1f4d,2450993EB016,Only you know how you are feeling inside and whenever somebody says that they use technology to read students emotional expressions they are not accurate . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec46a6da0a83,2450993EB016,The Mona Lisa picture is intended to make somebody smile but it only shows what the computer can do ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+54190debdfe0,2450993EB016,"The creater of the picture has made more than one picture . You may not see anything in the picture that shows emotion but there is always something in his paintings . The Mona Lisa picture is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted , 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry . She has many emotions not just one ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f719c487d56,2450993EB016,Even thought you may think the Mona Lisa may be boring it does show emotion but it is hard to find . New computer software has been made to inhance the picture .   ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e877f27f6396,24AD94A6AB3E,Ill be sumerizing the article over venus and why it is not we can not step foot on this planet. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6a3c46bc327f,24AD94A6AB3E,It says in paragraph two that venus is drapped in clouds and that the un manned ships that have been send did not last more that 2 hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+863b761e3ac4,24AD94A6AB3E,That is whay no man has ever steped foot on Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+410b2283fa79,24AD94A6AB3E,"Venus is a chellenging planet the last time a space craft touched down was 3 decades. Beyond high pressureand heat, eupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikesto probes seeking to land on its surface. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+49cbd709df6c,24AD94A6AB3E,"If Venus is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing visits to its surface. Astronomers are fasinated by Venus because it may have been much like earth long ago. The planet has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as vallies, mountains, and craters.
+
+Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the the planet itself. also because human curiosity will likelylead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b078b166355,24C5ED476177,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break, but are unsure whether these tasks should be student-designed or teacher-designed. Psychologists have proven that in order for a person to actually remember information, that information needs to be repeatedly tested upon in order to remain significant in the brain. Summer break, as a huge gap in between learning periods, is massively disruptive to the cognitive process ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d30138609ccd,24C5ED476177,Summer projects given over the break period should be moderately designed by the students themselves ,Position,Effective,,,
+107277c83a4e,24C5ED476177,it gives the student control over their individual situation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e39c1041de0c,24C5ED476177,it allows the student to express themselves creatively ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c98ef2c0f79,24C5ED476177,it removes pressure from school teachers, all while preparing them for life after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+d2cb5cddd1e9,24C5ED476177,"Students in school are constantly coddled, both by their parents and by the teachers in their learning environment. Giving an individual the ability to plan and create their own project is teaching them how to manage tasks on their own ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d0d04728dce,24C5ED476177,"It allows them to take into account their schedule, their own situation. Teenagers in high school spread rapidly after the school season has ended. Some travel, or get jobs, or go to summer camps; while others prefer to stay rooted where they are comfortably. Giving students that ability to decide for themselves how they are going to carry through with working around those activities is necessity. It allows them room to breathe. Putting the responsibility of caring for their own needs in students' hands gives them the much-needed abilities they will need for later in life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+32a27405f8f7,24C5ED476177,"Teenagers during the school year often don't get the opportunity to express themselves creatively and individually. Tasks designed during this time are teacher-designed and often follow a strict to-do list, which mushes everyone's work into one giant puddle of the same idea ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9887b2cfc1a3,24C5ED476177,Giving students the thumbs-up to style and create their own work assignment suddenly sets the bar way higher. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9fec48e0ea5a,24C5ED476177,"Students are much more likely to branch out from the boring, black and white school project normally set by teachers. Difference in thought is an important concept that needs to be stressed to young people in society. No person is the same as any other. Setting an individual up for normality is setting them up for failure in the real world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc10519ebbee,24C5ED476177,"Being constantly ailed with stress and work is definitely not beneficial for a persons' health. Teachers especially, who work in an environment surrounded by teen drama and the potential spread of sickness, need time off to recover. Forcing them to plan and grade massive projects during their supposed ""time off"" is unfair to them. During the school year, teachers often have no time to waste to spend with their own children, because they are so focused on having to grade those two-hundred papers for school. Giving teachers time away from the stress of other peoples' children gives them time to set aside for themselves and for their kids. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2d219bab80f8,24C5ED476177,"Some people may claim that giving students the ability to design their own project is not ""giving"" but ""forcing"". Students may need guidelines in order to work properly and receive a fair grade for their effort. Or worst case, they simply won't do the work. If a student needs a step-by-step process on how to recount their learning, then how will they expect to fend for themselves once they graduate? ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c43b80ff91eb,24C5ED476177,"During high school, students need this time to learn more than just history or math, they need to learn how to manage their own lives. Giving them the right to design their own project is the best decision for both students and teachers.   ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bc49340ab6d7,24FA36D49DB7,"As the school year comes to an end, the school halls are filled with students' conversing about their summer plans, an the joys of the school year being over. However, for many students, school isn't nearly over. Some schools task their students with summer projects to ensure that students keep learning outside of the school year. Ultimately, it is questioned whether the project should be teacher-designed, or student-designed ",Lead,Effective,,,
+744a2452910a,24FA36D49DB7,"When a student is given the power to design their own project, it allows the student to grow mentally and help broaden their learning horizons. ",Position,Effective,,,
+17d7cd64a3ba,24FA36D49DB7,"This allows students to base their project on something that they are heavily interested in, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+da1c2ec712e3,24FA36D49DB7,others might even venture beyond what they are already familiar with ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87f8ba671de4,24FA36D49DB7,it motivates them to complete their assignment with passion. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f39a4a234fc3,24FA36D49DB7,"It is very often that when a student is told they must complete a project based off a topic that they aren't interested in, their initial thought may be that the project will be boring and difficult. However, when they are allowed to chose their topic, it is very likely that their perspective might change into a more positive point of view. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+362001f8a244,24FA36D49DB7,students might try and explore other topics in which they lack knowledge ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ff9af4bd5f7,24FA36D49DB7,"By learning about different subjects, one is able to broaden their educational horizons, which may come in handy later on in life. I once new a woman who arrived at college ""undecided"". She was unsure of what to major in, and she was later told that she needed to complete a project in a subject of her choosing by the end of the year. Soon after the news, she realized that she needed to decide on a project fast, so she decided she would join her parish during one of their visits to a poor community out of town. She had no knowledge of how to help the people in the community, but she believed that she would be able to both accomplish her project, and make an impact on these people's lives. Her project was then completed after she spent her summer building ramps, cooking meals, and painting murals for that community. Soon after her project was completed, she decided that she would major in Social Services, because making an impact in people's lives and helping them achieve a better life was something she would want to do as a career.
+
+By being able to choose her project, she was able to broaden all of her horizons and grow as a person as well as mentally mature through her experiences. Once again, if there had been restrictions on that project and it was no longer on a topic of her choosing, but instead she had to complete a paper on politics, she could've spent a couple more years undecided, or she could've dropped out of college. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+453968cbec5f,24FA36D49DB7,"when students are allowed to design their own projects, they not only take their time to complete their project, but they pay attention to every last detail, and make sure that everything is done to their liking ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c51e289440f1,24FA36D49DB7,"It can be said that some of these projects are the result of passion. For example, during my Sophomore year in high school, I was assigned a project based off a genocide of my choosing. Originally I thought I would do this project on the Rwandan genocide, but thought better of it since I was already familiar with it. In the end, I decided on the Cambodian Genocide and decided I would be doing a scrapbook for the execution of the project. At first the research was a bit slow since I was unfamiliar with the topic, but as I learned more about the subject, I found a passion for the project I didn't know I had. I began working on the scrapbook everyday after school over the course of a month. By the time the deadline had come, the project had been completed and was ready to be displayed on Genocide Night. In the end, I was able to score a high grade, and even used my research for a project assigned for my art class a year later. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6853a39f7fbe,24FA36D49DB7,"student designed projects are beneficial for the student as it gives them the opportunity to increase their knowledge in a variety of topics as well as help them mentally mature. When given the choice to infinite possibilities, there is plenty of space for infinite success. Teacher designed projects, more often than not, are usually seen as boring, time consuming tasks, because they are created by someone that doesn't have a students interests in mind. Projects assigned during the school year are solely based on the topic they are learning, or book they are reading in class. However, summer projects should not have that restriction despite the project's purpose of making sure that students are learning. Students should be allowed to take the reigns on their projects, and lead them in the direction that they want to go in. When students are given the freedom of choosing, they are more inclined to learn and retain that information, then when they are forced to learn about things they could care less about.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6e40d1668505,2513771E4659,The current legal consequences of using your cell phone while driving is not that harsh compared to other states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe64fc3ccb82,2513771E4659,"but in florida they are not that hard on them but in other states in like Georgia Colorado
+
+Washington dc etc., but in florida it's only seen as offensive but all that changed in effect in july 2019.
+
+Causing accidents on the phone and ( texting) use while driving is 15% are distracted and 20 thru 29 across the nation are the biggest culprits amongst those who use cell phones while driving 35% of them are phone fatal crashes including the 234 fatal crashes. the restriction from usage while driving I know a few states that issued the law against texting, if precautions and specially enter the car then maybe this epidemic the type of things that is not issued the most in some states that need to be in forced but aren't is the reason why that is ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0881504ecf39,2513771E4659,is because they don't see them as life threatening and that why some states still have fatal car accidents such as Georgia they still have fatal accidents because a lot of people have their phones in hand which causes them to swerve in the roads ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe90647f00c0,2513771E4659,"and also they cause more trouble for emergency drivers to get by to save someone else life about 23 percent of people are more likely are to be caught up in car crashes than other driver for example just a simple decision of just replying back to a messages. On average three seconds after a driver is distracted overall, all these statistics are saying the same thing is that one text cam wreck all and truth be told a lot of young people has said that they sent a text while driving as an result if people being in a car accident. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b007a911d1d8,2513771E4659,People with inexperience and lacking driving skills ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67278114014e,2513771E4659,cell phone use can very deadly for teen drivers ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+85c3c5a82381,2513771E4659,"because technology has different ways of distracting drives now and days some researchers from
+
+Philadelphia children's hospital teens who do not frequently drive use a phone while driving believes the benefits of putting away their phone away while driving outweighs any drawbacks. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+202d58dc20aa,2513771E4659,"for these teens, the benefits associate with not using a cell phone while driving include being able to pay better attention, being less likely to have a crash, and following the laws also parent have to realize that the their teens are driving and cannot call or text them they can only do so after their teen is at their destination or call them before they go on the road.         ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb8967532b98,25279CF8444F,"When the school year ends most students are just exited to know that they don't have to learn, knowing they can just relax, hang out with friends, or party. On the other hand, isn't this just holding them back in their learning process? Shouldn't they do some type of project that will allow them to exercise the mind and keep them learning? Well it is easier for the students and for the teachers when they come back from break and the students haven't completely forgotten everything that was taught to them the previous year, so some schools decided to have students do a project over the summer break that can help these students grow as intellectuals . Having said that, who should decide what project to do during the break, the teacher or the student? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+880b08b16f61,25279CF8444F,"Students are very lazy when they start to get closer to summer and to the break, they don't want to deal with the stress of the school. Having a project over the summer is the last thing that a student wants to do ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+377b199274fa,25279CF8444F,"if they have the option of choosing what to do they will always chose something that isn't going to challenge them in anyway and will chose to do a easy topic that they can get done fast, that they already know, or that they have done before ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4f134df65c30,25279CF8444F,"Even though students are the ones doing the project, teachers are the ones who understand the subjects that student should be learning. If you let a student pick a subject to work on over the summer, he could chose something very unnecessary that would have no impact in the students growth as an intellectual, he could say he is doing a science project that would ask how many hours he can play a video game before he gets hungry and eats food, or before he has to go to the bathroom. Teachers who got to know and understand their students throughout the year would know what they could be interested in and would work on during the summer. For students to be interested in something they want to understand how it works and find it fun to do. In order for students to not slack off and procrastinate they must find it interesting to them or they wont work on it. That is another thing that teachers must considered when giving out the projects that their students must do over the summer, if teachers assign the same project to everyone, many of them can get such projects done fairly quickly and not challenge them at all, having it done so soon they didn't learn anything for the project, or having all of them do the same project would just have them copy each other. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eeb4c12c5232,25279CF8444F,"Having teachers know their students strengths and their weaknesses, can help the teacher determine what project the student can work on that they will enjoy doing and will challenge them, helping them learn all at the same time. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+ddbf1780dcbe,25279CF8444F,"All teachers want for their students is for them to be successful, in order for them to achieve such success they need to understand and go though the challenges that they have to face and the failures they must grow from in order for them to grow their knowledge as an individual. During the summer break, students benefit from having a project that can help them keep the knowledge they gained though out the school year, and not having to be shocked back into the next school year when they come back and have to re-learn stuff from the previous year that they may have forgotten, after that they can finally move forward and learn new things ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+65d257dd2f04,25279CF8444F,"The teachers give out this project for the whole purpose that given project helps students move forward, they assigned the project to the individual students knowing what would help them grow without having the summer break erasing everything they learned the previous year.  ",Position,Effective,,,
+ae49812ac9ed,254DB921E152,"The Challenge of Exploring Venus, Venus is called the ""Evening Star"" it's one of the brightest stars in the nigh sky. Venus is a planet its the second planet from the sun. The atmopshere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. NASA is tring other approaches to study Venus. Venus is a planet trying to be explored and studied. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6c1008a1349d,254DB921E152,"Venus is the second planet in line to the sun. Earth's twin is Venus, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in density and the size. Earth, Venus and Mars are neighboring planets they all orbit the sun at different speeds. No man has been on Venus NASA has tried to send spaceships up to Venus but the ships never survived the landing some did but they didn't make it past a few hours. Venus has never been touched by man. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a486e600e07c,254DB921E152,The auther has good pionts he claims the average temperature on Venus is over 800 degrees and that the atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a0b22e52036,254DB921E152,"The auther makes good pionts of why we should study this planet, to learn to expand our minds into space. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4e6f25cafc1,254DB921E152,Spending resources on studying planets is a good and a bad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b17c7b102302,254DB921E152,"Studying planet that can't help us is a wate of time, finding a planet out there that have air and can grow plants is a big find and we should study those planets. The auther has claimed that Venus has a temputer of 800 degrees no person a live can live through that so that planet is the worth taking time, resources and money to go out and study. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a829caaa1c5,254DB921E152,"Planets like ours and Mars. Mars is worth all the time, resorces and money to gonout and find more about because later in our life or in the furture Mars could be the next Earth. NASA has aldready claimed before they have found water and grass. Venus has nothing close due to its 800 degrees and the atomspheric is 90 times greater than ours so you can't breathe on Venus ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e320f1058b9,254DB921E152,"The auther made great claims but I feel we could foucs more on Mars and other planets like ours. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d593e1555a53,254DB921E152,"The Challenge of Exploring Venus, is not woth the study. Venus is one of the highly dangers planets our there in space. Better fouces on Mars than Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7390d2e4490,254DB921E152,The auther had great claims but the enough to sell me into the studying of Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3bcfd23f39e7,255F29455E8B,The author wants us to learn about Venus because NASA wants us to know stuff about our other planets. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f0f8b7b9a6b6,255F29455E8B,"NASA wants us to learn about Venus to hopefully tell others about what we learned and maybe they will want to learn about Venus too. They can learn that Venus is likes Earth's ""twin"", its the closesest planet to Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest distance too. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+587784ebe98c,255F29455E8B,You can learn who was the first to land on Venus and who was the last and how long you can stay on Venus until you have to come back down to Earth for more food and supples ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c212d7265fa2,255F29455E8B,"Only one spaceship can go up there because they can't have more than 3 to 4 people on Venus doing the same thing, they don't have that much room on the spaceship for everyone that wants to go on Vensu anyways. Not everyone knows about Venus but if you go to NASA websit and look up information about it you can learn more about the planets around us and see how you can become one of the people to go on the other planets that are around us or just become one of the members on the station. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21cc1e0225d7,255F29455E8B,The average temperature is 800 degrees fahrenheit there so you would need a very high powered suit to keep that from killing you if you go to Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5499a315fa1a,255F29455E8B,800 degrees is WAY to hot for anyone to go up there and take a look. The ship would need to be checked out to make sure that the teperatures didn't cook the spaceship. The air level would close to the sea level on earth so we would have to be super carefull when we get off the spaceship to get information about the planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e92fa82c921e,255F29455E8B,"You can hover over Venus and look out the windows on the spacehip to look at Venus and youc can to try get information on it from there. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus, soon we will know what they are talking about. Soon NASA will be able to get more information on Venus and if it is ready for living objects to come and live on it and if not then NASA can find another planet and study that one for a couple of years and see if that one is live able. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cd6c4c3504cd,259C732E5942,Extracurricular activities are good for everyone. For example you might want to go into acting or sports. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c37797c13db5,259C732E5942,You might just want to try something new. You might think that something is boring but then you end up liking it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0eca03c40238,259C732E5942,Just like how I never thought I would like basketball but I tried out for the team. Turns out I do like basketball and I think I'm pretty good at it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c99599ee454,259C732E5942,You get to meet new people and you get to try something new. If you think you like something else better you can always join that club. You might even be surprised by how much you like it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b2a537accc26,259C732E5942,"Now, say you a new student at a new school. Like anyone else you would like to make new friends. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+36ddbde15ba7,259C732E5942,"So, why don't you join a club? Everyone in that club likes the same interests as you. You would make friends right away. Even if you quit everyone in that club will still be your friend. You can move to a different club and make friends there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29e3ccc9e009,259C732E5942,yes I do agree that students must participate in an extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7b04d0c55f5d,259C732E5942,They get to try something new. They could try something that they think the don't like but then actually do. They can make new friends. So I think it is a good choice for students to take extracurricular activities. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e3ca3aa6e50,25C32F08C197,"Leonardo Da Vinci was one of the greatest reniassance painters of the time. His study of the human anatomy allowed him to create pictures that captured the humna state. On of his most well known paintings is the ""Mona Lisa"". The Mona Lisa is a women that has sort of complacent facial features. She doesn't really look happy or sad. This was the popular thought up until a new technology was created. This technology is called the Facial Action Coding System. This technology is able to deduce what emotion a person is feeling. It is able to do this whothout the person even showing an obvious emotion. This technology can also be implenmented in many spheres of life, including in the classroom. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+34f5b595b2ee,25C32F08C197,The use of this technology to read the expressions of students in a learning envionement can help students learn more efffectivly ,Position,Effective,,,
+4c72e785d245,25C32F08C197,"allowing for immediate feedback from a student allowing for the quick shift of a lesson plan, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7f619ac4aabe,25C32F08C197,being able to help and support students emotionally. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+de97dcad4e8a,25C32F08C197,This technology can help get immediate feedback from students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cbab2d131d66,25C32F08C197,"In almost all class rooms nation wide there is a similar routine. Learn something, practice it for homework and then see if a student is understanding it by taking a quiz over it. While this may be effective, it can be imporved ten fold with the Facial Action Coding System. The technology could understand emotion of students in present time. A teacher wouldn't have to wait to give out a quiz to see if students were having issues. They could teach the subject and then immediatly know if students are having difficulty unerstanding it. Dr. Huang, the creator of FACS, states that ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"". If teachers are able to recieve this information, their teaching would become more effective. Teachers could change lesson plans in order to fit the needs of the students, and give extra support and help to those children that are still struggling. FACS can also help excite studnets about learning. This is important because no matter how much a teacher trys to help a student, the studnet will not imporve in anything if thet do not want to learn. If computers are able to read if studnets are excited or bored by a lesson, teachers would add visuals and what not to make it more intersesting to a student. This would make them want to learn, not them being required to learn. totality, the ability to be able to percieve students emotions would help students academically by allowing teachers to change lesson plans that allow for more excitment and understand in classrooms. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c800545630a,25C32F08C197,"To continue, the FACS technology would help students be more emotionally stable. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a12580fb0628,25C32F08C197,"While school is a vaulable place to learn new information and facts, it is really a place for children to grow and become more independent and better human beings. While grades matter, the emotional and pyschological health of a student is far more valuable. The FACS technology could act as an army of school counselers. High School and Middle School students tend not to share their emotions, even with their parents. FACS could idntify students that are emotionally troubled, have depression, contemplate self harm or even have mental illness. Once students like these are identified then counselers and social workers could step in, allowing for students to be helped. Right now students that struggle with these issues do not share their feelings. They do not get help and carry on like they are fine. While many may turn out to be okay, even one taking their own life or somebody's else, is too much. While FACS may not be able to help or eliminate all signs of emotional distress, it can surely make a difference. Another benfit of using FACS is that it reads emotoins silently. Students don't have to potray a certain emotion for the technology to understand what they are really feeling. If a studnet is asked how they are, they probably give a surface level, I am fine, answer. The technology reads through that completely, eliminating awkard one on one conversatoins with conselers, and allowing for all students to be reached. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c77af8107739,25C32F08C197,While there are many positives to this technology some might argue that computers cannot actually calculate human emotion. They argue that human emotion is not somehting that can or should be understood because it would ruin the entirety of feeling certain ways. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+15d9a651ab52,25C32F08C197,"However, while some arguements may be warranted, many are based off of falsehoods. To begin, emotion can be understood on a scientific level. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5c651e93971d,25C32F08C197,"Emotion is in the brain, not the heart. The way the FACS understands emoion is simple. It maps out a 3-D model of the face, looks at the shape and positoin of all the muscles, then it associates the different facial movements with differet emotion. For example, your orbicularis oris (muscles around your mouth) tighten your lips to show when you are angry. It even works when a person it trying to mask emotions. During a fake smile, the zygomatic major stretches the mouth sidways, while in a real smile the zygomatic major lifts the corners of the mouth. These examples can show how science IS able to understand emotoin, probaly better than most humans. Arguments that use that falshood, that science is unable to understand emotion, is completly false. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d1cee022a827,25C32F08C197,"In conclusion, the ability to read the actual emotion and reactions of students in class rooms is extremely valuable because it allows for greater understanding and excitment of a subject, along with the ability to help students be emotionally stable. If this technology is implemented into schools, studnets will overall do better, feel better and make a brighter world for tomorrow. FACS is something revolutionary that hopefully all of us can learn somthing from. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9fbe169a9cbd,25C41D233D24,Why you should not need to take one extracurricular activity to pass the school year. The principle has decided that you need to take at lest one extracurricular activity to pass each school year. Here are some reasons ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+370d869add8e,25C41D233D24,". One it can give the student stress, by making them worried about if he or she will pass. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c1ed88d64ab5,25C41D233D24,"Two it can start a loss in productivity, by making the students' work rate slow down and make them struggle more ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0005969dea79,25C41D233D24,"Three it will overload the student, because they might be going for a advanced diploma and that would pile on top of the student making it hard for the student to do his or her work. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+922f992c31cc,25C41D233D24,Those were a few reasons why you should not need to take a extracurricular activity to pass the school year. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3a28c9cca56e,25C41D233D24,Taking a extracurricular activity can cause lots of stress to a student ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8e0858b3b61,25C41D233D24,"by, first making the student get lower grades, because they have to split their focus to two things at once therefore making the student worried about if he or she will pass the year. Second can make the students upset, by making the student do more work then they need. Third it can drive the students insane, by making the students do way too much school work. Those were some reasons why, you should not need to take a extracurricular activity to pass the school year. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe7bed3e4eec,25C41D233D24,Taking a extracurricular activity can create a loss in productivity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fac9e2d8c09,25C41D233D24,"First it can make them want to stop trying to get good grades, simply by giving the student a lot of work and barely any time to relax. Second it can stop the student focus dead in it's tracks, just because there is a little too much work for the student to keep going and work. Third
+
+It will also slow down the student work rate and make them feel like they need to study more which then will put the student in a very bad mental place. Those were also some reasons why, you should not need to take a extracurricular activity to pass the school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+74106a2e8931,25C41D233D24,Taking a extracurricular activity can overload some students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce185d3d5ad4,25C41D233D24,"First it can make the student do too much work, because some students are going for a advanced diploma and if they had to do a extracurricular activity that would pile on top of the student making him or her do too much work. Second some student might have other activities to do out side of school so that would just stop them from doing what they enjoy after school. Third it may also make students miss out on certain events that happen every couple of years, like for say you wanted to go to a concert that a band was doing and that was there last concert that they will ever do, you would really want to go, but as long as you have a extracurricular activity you might not be able to go and watch the performance in person. Those were the final reasons why should not need to take a extracurricular activity to pass the school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ac1b946df9f,25C41D233D24,"Those are a few reason why, you should not need to take a extracurricular activity to pass the school year. Another reason is because it can cause stress by making the student focus on two things at once therefore bring the students grades down and make the student worried about if he or she will pass the year. Another reason is it can create a loss in productivity by slowing down the work rate of the student making them feel dumb or behind in class. The final reason to wrap it up is that it can overload a student by giving them too much work permanently putting themselves in a bad mental state at school just because of a little too much work. Those were all the reasons why you should not need a extracurricular activity to pass the school year. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+00264751395f,25DECA78E234,"Many poeple are saying it looks as if it's a face or some sort. Some peopel are even saying aliens have put it on Mars to tell us soemthing, but I hilly dout that. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a1a1371647f4,25DECA78E234,He began to say that ailens put it there! ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+75a03f7d5191,25DECA78E234,All I could think of is why and how would they do it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1a66a497a489,25DECA78E234,"They may not even be real, we have no evidence to show that soemthing living lives up on Mars. I had began to tell him that's it's not possiable! I even gave facts about how anything livinh like humans or animals couldn't live up there. But he still thought it was true. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+adf2cfa3c9d1,25DECA78E234,The face on Mars had been getting bigger and many poeple hadn't though aliens did it after reading my page. By doing so much research I sort of made a differnce about it and Im proud to say all the hard work turned out to be a amazing thing to do.            ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0594c0569407,25FA01853A35,"In the article ""Making Mons Lisa Smile,"" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enable computers to identify human emotions ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a61bcc6f44dd,25FA01853A35,I disagee about using of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ae23c115d9c0,25FA01853A35,"Technology, such as phones, laptops, or any devices, is not always true. They can predict about how people feel or their emtions. For example, in the second paragraph in the first sentence, it says, ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90dc20873391,25FA01853A35,Every people have different types of emotions. It's true that they have different kinds of emotions but what if it is fake? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+76d89c428137,25FA01853A35,"Computers are like robots. Computers can't prefer if someone is smiling or upset. Computers don't understand if someone is really smiling for real or faking smiling. It depends on someone's face. For instance, when a friend talk something fun, I smile but when a friend talk something boring, I smile too so they can be happy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6ddd33c13b4,25FA01853A35,Is putting on a happy face actually work? I prefer not because it depends on someone's emotions inside instead of the outside. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bed6f33b600,25FA01853A35,"Not everybody can read someone's mind. In the last paragraph in the second sentence, it says, ""According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c9a494a2666a,25FA01853A35,"It can be true, but it can be false. People don't know what is going to happen next. So people have to figure out on their own. So I disagree that about using of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b07a953a9d54,268675CF9C2B,"Have you ever wanted to participate in a extracurricular program?
+
+Students must participate in at least one sport, work on the year books,or serve on the student council. This will help the students stay healthy,caleberate with others,or educate the students in different understandings. This way the students can be perductive in their time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e7d6256b45fb,268675CF9C2B,"Extracurricular programs help the students stay healthy,caleberate with others,educate them with different understandings, and have a perductive time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+444c9d71e26d,268675CF9C2B,"Have you ever wanted a yearbook? yearbooks have many memories, and excitment . You can be apart of this exciting journey. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc4f42b6dc2f,268675CF9C2B,"The yearbook is a man made iteam that you help make. The yearbook also shows how you've grow up over the years. The yearbooks price will be 15$.You can capture the excitment,the memories, and the price of 15$. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5124a298a82,268675CF9C2B,Have you ever wanted to play a sport? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f0e93afd91b,268675CF9C2B,"Sports have been on this planet for many years. Their's so many options you can choose from like basketball,soccer,baseball, pingpong,cricket,or even swimming. These are all good ways of staying active. Sports have been alive for many years , they also keep you healthy so you can live an easy life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d9d420ff96f,268675CF9C2B,Have you ever wanted to be apart of the school council? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa7935b347ea,268675CF9C2B,"The school council is a great program. They all you the make statments for the schools. This is one of many choices to be a leader. School council is a great extracurricluar program for students it makes staments,and is a good choice to be a leader. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b946ecd2d58,268675CF9C2B,I agree with the princapal to make students be involved with extracurricluar prgrams. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c47d2eda33dd,268675CF9C2B,Sports is an easy way to be involved by saying healthy and being perductive. Yearbooks is a great ways be involed and to make a memorial of the schools years. Student council is a great way to help when needed and to make the school a better place. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d38640375ef,268FBF7E756F,I think it should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f2993d79e080,268FBF7E756F,some students take the summer to travel to family members houses and stuff like that. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aeb127c18a2c,268FBF7E756F,"So i think if the mom thinks the student needs to go to summer school that's her decion, students stay in school for 9 months a year so that's plenty of time to get everything they need done by summer. that can cause alot of disagreements with the family. Let's say the mom wants you to go to summer school but the dad thinks otherwise because yall already have plans to do somthing different, summer school can cause an arguement. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9bca6be34c58,268FBF7E756F,"I think if it was a teacher-designed, some teachers would only pick certian kids that they didn't like or somthing maybe and that wouldn't be far, also the teachers wouldn't know if they already have plans for somthing different or not ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e061634fc7d1,268FBF7E756F,"It should be the parents decions why or why not. But if it was a teacher-designed more students would come and catch up on more work or somthing like that so it could also be good at the same point, for instence let's say your behide on a sol and have to gradute in the summer if you would of just went to summer school in ur highschool days maybe you wouldn't have to gradute in the summer. So it could go both ways i think but if your a student then you should know if you need to go to summer school or not because it won't be fair for your parents to know everything, you got a part in it to. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+34b6269f7c4b,268FBF7E756F,"therefor, i think it should be students-designed because they might have plans for the summer or might not need summer school. But if they need it and don't go then it's there fault not the teachers because atleast they provide summer school to students that need it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eedc33220546,26B8039AB3E7,Texting and driving is not what we need and American. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7abc4cf4607a,26B8039AB3E7,"We as teens think it's cool to drive fast
+
+And want attention and were not thinking about someone getting hurt. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aebb66a48e1a,26B8039AB3E7,"It's also we don't pay
+
+Attention that's why we have the highest rate in Georgia. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+95ecf7186bba,26B8039AB3E7,"People are dying because they want
+
+Their girlfriend/boyfriend to think their cool. We are also hurting ourselves by putting us and a bad
+
+Crash we are getting hurt. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6953e1d215b5,26B8039AB3E7,People don't think about JAIL. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84c14a0ada2e,26B8039AB3E7,"You can lose your ID and paid money
+
+Just for running over a red light not putting your seatbelt on. To prevent we need to make sure our
+
+Phones are off while driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b64e81512108,26B8039AB3E7,"Teens think it's cool when you drink and smoke and have to drive
+
+Home if you are at a party and your friend drank too much and try to drive home Prevent it
+
+Before she/he gets hurts and maybe die from a car crash. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7dcb95c054c2,26B8039AB3E7,"Texting should only be for when you are just sitting and the car it's not on your and the parking lot
+
+Waiting on your mom ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18e9da3cd273,26B8039AB3E7,"Hats when its fine but when you are backing backed make sure you look
+
+Both ways left and right, it's like when you walk across the street you look both ways How to
+
+Prevent car crashing, you have to look for children make sure you drive slow by schools or
+
+When you close it's going to say slowly down school ahead. Keep at least one hand on the steel
+
+Wheel. Do not drive with no hands it not cool or safe it can put you and danger, Make sure you
+
+Have your seatbelt you can fly out the window and die just because you didn't put your seatbelt
+
+On. Be courteous to the other drivers no one on the roads. so you should treat people with
+
+Respect.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09b6182569a2,26C3C02A1614,"Using this type of technology can be somewhat unsafe to students in classrooms, beacsue what if they aren't happy and someone uses the Facial Action Coding System, but then reveals how the person really feels. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6aa122b3cd2,26C3C02A1614,"More into the future it has gotten to a point that companies will stop at nothing for growth and development. But these things can cause a major unbalnce to everyone. Just like the Facial Action Coding System, this thing can be someones enemy, becasue maybe this person can be against the whole thing. And using it on some one that didn't want to be used could lead the person to do bad things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2f15ae71d2f,26C3C02A1614,"On the other hand, other people can come foward and say ""it is time for change"" and be all happy, and the next thing you know is that the world is run be robots. Change is good, but it can also lead to destruction and caos. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00eb4f007087,26C3C02A1614,"That is why we have to be careful with what we do in future, because what we do now can harm some innocent life that didn't deserve it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+28acc9ef0348,26C3C02A1614,"The passage alson states that Leonardo used knew how ""Mona Lisa"" felt when he was drawing her. At first he didn't know if she was smiling. But then he just let is go and began to draw. And now we are here, to the future and people wanting to knoww how another perosn feels by using a computer. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7f32bf73888,26C3C02A1614,"Like i've stated before, change can go in a good or bad way. There is no way saying it could be both or could be something completly different. We just got to be careful with what we have now or they may be no future. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+64c54fc452a9,26E218908B4C,"Summer break provides students with a time to relax and refresh in preparation for the following year. The break is a necessity in the school systems as it offers students the opportunity to experience different aspects of life outside of the classroom. Additionally, this period to refresh assists students in their learning career as it prevents academic burnout. However, some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during the break ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4fa6c4c2806c,26E218908B4C,"In situations where summer projects are assigned, projects should be student-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+a8e0f31ed98d,26E218908B4C,"for they allow students to take initiative in their learning, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+65006446836f,26E218908B4C,gain a deeper understanding of the chosen topic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0681bf448cf3,26E218908B4C,minimize the chance that students feel they are not being given a break. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4bf1ed0f224,26E218908B4C,"In allowing students to design their own project, the student is given the opportunity to take charge of their learning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d8b21bf93ec,26E218908B4C,"The initiative a student-designed project offers allows students to choose a topic they are interested in and later hope to pursue. For example, a young student with little interest in art and literature would not benefit from being forced to read certain novels throughout the summer. Exposure to the essential texts needed to further their language abilities will be gained throughout the school year. Therefore, as the school year already provides students with the basic skills to advance their academic career, summer should be a time students have the opportunity to pursue their own interests, best achieved through the completion of student-designed projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+110cbcd5cf1e,26E218908B4C,"Likewise, with the idea that a student designs a project on a topic they are interested in, the project will be done more thoroughly, allowing students to gain a deeper understanding. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0fe1e68cfc95,26E218908B4C,"As a human tendency, people are more likely to work on something they are interested and excited about. The more the project is worked on, the more complex and thorough it will be. Interest and excitement in a topic positively affect the extent to which the project will be worked on. Typically, the time spent on the project is directly related to the overall understanding of the concept. Considering teachers assign summer work to assure students continue learning during their break, projects should be student-designed as they promote a deeper understanding of the given topic. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cdb4d1f14309,26E218908B4C,having students complete a project they have designed themselves minimizes the feeling of the traditional school dynamic ,Claim,Effective,,,
+de84d0ffd0c8,26E218908B4C,"Throughout the school year, students are assigned the work they need to complete in order to receive an ""A."" Completing work is often done out of requirement rather than personal interest. Summer is used as a break from the many requirements of school. A student-designed project will seem like less of a requirement as it is based upon self-interest. Minimizing the feeling that the work must be done out of requirement ensures students have the time to refresh while continuing their academics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+638cbf528fd6,26E218908B4C,"summer is a vital time for students to take a break from the hardships of the previous school year. Yet, some teachers want to assure students continue their learning over the break. If a school believes summer work should be assigned, projects should be student-designed. A project designed by a student encourages them to take initiative in their learning, gain a deeper understanding of the chosen topic, and still feel as if they had a break from school and its traditional dynamic.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e89f87919604,274CB6483DB9,This story is really about how many people studying about Mona Lisa and how the way her mood is. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+403a3a7941b7,274CB6483DB9,"Lots of people try to figure out her history on her emotions. Someone uses a 3d computer and he figures out that she has 6 other emotions of herself. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+369a0a31c0b1,274CB6483DB9,"Some people try to study her history from back in the day because of why she dosent smile that often and why is she always angry. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b1932205e118,274CB6483DB9,Some people perform an impressive calculation on her feelings by the look of her face. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b99e4cbe33db,274CB6483DB9,Conclusion: The whole story is about why people wonder why Mona Lisa never smiles that often. People uses lots of technology to try to figure out the way her mood was before she had 6 different emotions someone calls the person who knows lots of history about the story. Then they figure out that she did finaly smile during a painting class. By the look of her face the first time that someone notist lots of people were impressed it raised your eyebrows when you where surprised. Her smile really did change some back story about her first mood. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1628c24984cf,27837D0F399E,I was a Seagoing Cowboy. I help feed the horses that are getting tranported to Europe. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+44b981e8fa68,27837D0F399E,I remember that one time I tried to convince some other people to join the program. It didn't go so well. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a4a7e18f176d,27837D0F399E,"
+""I don't like the sea air"", ""I hate the ocean"", "" I can't swim"", ""What we get tropedoed? I can't swim"", I have allergies to horses"". These are exuses I get when I try to convince other people to join the progam I am in. I did convince some, but not a lot. Most think that I am a creep. They try to get away from me. I am always sad when I see them walk away, but at least I tried. Eventuly I gave up trying to convince them.
+
+So here I am, on the sea, thinking about the people that I tried to get them to join. Every time that I thought about them, I think about what they are doing right now. When I was discharged, I went off to find every single one of the people and tell about my journys. They always say the same thing. ""I wish I joined the program."" Then we have a good talk about what they did while I was overseas. I feel like that I have more friends than I used to before. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+20a8505f0ee6,279E6B94B3C4,"In today's world texting and driving is a normal thing. Over 660,000 deaths and 1.6 million crashes a year, people do it on a regular bases without thinking about it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+876471bac7f7,279E6B94B3C4,Texting and driving needs to stop now before more people get hurt. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3267475f58bb,279E6B94B3C4,ADD is a big reason too for people have no choice but to get distracted on things which cause crashes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f1fb16caebbd,279E6B94B3C4,"Distraction is the main reason crashes happen, people get distracted on anything and everything and don't know what to do when they're about to crash ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47479a71d1bf,279E6B94B3C4,"Phones are big distractions in the world today, especially in teens who just start driving, when they get a message the first thing they know to do is check it no matter what. To fix this problem states have inflicted heavier laws, for example Georgia has the no hands law and that means you can't have any hands on your phone at all, not even calls can be answered. Texting while driving is such a bad choice because it can cause you to swerve off road or swerve into someone's car. It's a bad habit in today's society and it needs to be stopped. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c3ca0565487,279E6B94B3C4,"In conclusion texting and driving is all out bad, and needs to be stopped, there needs to be classes and more lessons taught on the effects of texting and driving. People need to also set an example for the new future because if it's not in forced more teens are liable to do it.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5e96c82986a0,27E6536433B9,"Everyday you see kids participating in football, baseball, basketball, and other extracurricular activities, it is part of the balanced day for most kids. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e40e524517cc,27E6536433B9,"Extracurricular activities are important and enjoyed by most, but I believe children should not be forced to do activities like sports or clubs. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+18d4de5e85a1,27E6536433B9,Even though extracurricular activities are important they are hard for some to do. Many parents and kids nowadays don't have time for these activities with all the work and homework they have to do. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6290d6a8fefe,27E6536433B9,Also some kids have disabilities or mental disabilities that cause problems when they are trying to do activities like football or yearbook club. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b001e590c120,27E6536433B9,"Homework is a required part of school and some schools give more homework than others. In schools that offer AP level classes students have about 4-5 hours of homework each day, giving them no time to do extracurricular activities. Kids are stressed with this work, and putting other activities on top of it is just creating more stress. Parents don't have time too because the average workday takes up most of their time, and driving kids back and forth from each activity can really mess up a parent's schedule. An average workday for parents is about 8 or 9 hours and work is hard and demanding for most parents. This is why the principal should not force kids to do extracurricular activities because some just simply don't have the time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4b6d50179229,27E6536433B9,"These disabilities cause some kids to have trouble with school work, focusing, and completing simple tasks such as writing with a pencil. This is why it would not be beneficial to force these kids to do extracurricular activities. The rigorous work of clubs like a math club, a yearbook club, or a reading club would overstimulate some of these kids. It would lead to tantrums, fits, and bad behavior from some of these kids, and it would distract the other club members from their work. Extracurricular activities like baseball or football would not be beneficial for them either because some of these kids with disabilities have trouble throwing a ball, standing up straight, and walking if it is a serious case. While it is not a bad thing for kids with disabilities or mental disabilities to join a club or sport, it is just harder for some of them to do extracurricular activities because of their underlying issues. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48be3426e901,27E6536433B9,"This is why I believe kids should not be forced to participate in extracurricular activities because while they are beneficial they are hard for some. Extracurricular activities cause issues for parents and kids with no time, and in some cases they force kids with disabilities to do things they cannot do. For example, some parents have work from 8 am until 7 pm and this would not allow any time for drop off and pick up. Also kids have a lot of homework, opening up little time for kids to do extracurricular activities. Lastly some kids with disabilities and mental disabilities just don't have the capacity to participate in extracurricular activities. Many say that extracurricular activities should be required, but I feel forcing all kids to do them is wrong ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+74b861b2b945,28314B1AC842,Throughout our school career's projects are often assigned to extend learning during the summer break. Summer projects are more often created by teachers. These projects are rather extensive due to the months that are given to complete it. Those who may oppose state that it is the teachers job to create these summer assignments and they are able to bring more structure to the project ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+13ac395fc273,28314B1AC842,"Although some may disagree that student projects should be designed by teachers, it should be known that this is not true. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+6cfdb64d4599,28314B1AC842,Students creating their own summer projects can benefit them as students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6856e50ec44,28314B1AC842,"Assignments that are completed by students are created by teachers, followed by a due date in which it is to be completed. After the assignment is completed the moving on to the next. Over time assignments become a chore and are less likely to be completed by students. Allowing students the chance to create their own summer project that they would truly excited to work. Through their own creation topics that students are interested about can be integrated into the summer project. Even though the summer project could be less structured it would completed time and time again. Having created their own assignments students would better understand what is to be expected in the terms of how to not only completed but also pass. Once on summer break students are unable to contact teachers if they have any questions about the project through having created it themselves this would eliminate the unanswered questions. If students were allowed to create their own summer projects it would give them a sense of control over their learning that is often lost throughout the school year. Some students can become detached from their learning with endless amounts of work that is assigned to them. Through the creation their summer projects it would also allow students to place their input and become more hands on within their learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6cd6364a3ed5,28314B1AC842,"Through creating their own assignments, students are able to build qualities that are helpful in a work environment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+603730b5b477,28314B1AC842,The process of coming up with rubrics and topics in which the assignment could be upon can be difficult. Team collaboration is vital for creating an assignment along side teachers and other students. Having the ability to voice an idea or criticism can be useful not only within school but also in an work environment. Not only having to create but also complete their assignment helps develop a sense of work ethic that is helpful in any situation. Students often rush to complete assignments very last minute and having formulated the assignment they would have a better understanding of how to space out their time to complete the summer project correctly. Along with school assignments this skill can be applied to any work place. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+1cfb2b9bc2d2,28314B1AC842,Summer projects can help extend learning outside of school during summer break. Through students creating their own summer project there is a better understanding of the project but also an excitement to complete it. Having created their project a sense of control over students learning can be gained which is often lost throughout the school year. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+273061829880,28314B1AC842,Those who oppose may state that teachers should create summer projects because they have more experience than students and that teachers are able to introduce new topics to students. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+613f15506d1d,28314B1AC842,"Students are often detached from their learning; therefor, allowing them to create a project that could possibly worked on for months can help student regain their love of learning. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8b59e65bf3f2,28B41BD59C3D,Explorering venus comes with a high pay off but high risk. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ffec42953f96,28B41BD59C3D,The authors claim is correct becuase it has enough information ot back up the idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+71977e0405bc,28B41BD59C3D,Venus's geographical and atmospheric condtions would not be ideal but it would provide anthor option for colonization in the future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7da51e31113d,28B41BD59C3D,"The exploration of Venus is worth while scientific endver. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb3a409b618c,28B41BD59C3D,The Authors study on Venus provides enought facts and evidnece to condiser further evaluation of the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+05080328fdbf,28B41BD59C3D,"""Long ago, venus was probaly coverd in large oceans and could have supported varouis forms of life, just like earth today"". The planet has a surface temperature of 800 degrees farien height. Also the planet has a much higher atmospheric pressure at over 90 times greater than Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0cb258ee997a,28B41BD59C3D,"Venus is closer to our plant than we thought. Even thought its atmosphere contains clouds that are made out of higly corrosive acid. ""The surface has a rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountians, and craters"". The terrian is showen to be ruff but not unbarable for human colonization. Also Venus is one the closest planets to own own planetthan most others. The due to the ground condtions being hostile surveyers would need to be located 30 or more miles above the surface of the planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89619e9bd976,28B41BD59C3D,"Exploring Venus would a beinificail and woth while scientific endver. Over the years Venus has been a topic of study due to its earth like qualites. The temperature of Venus is not as freindly to humans as our own atmosphereVenus is one the closest planets to own planet than most others. Lastly, the exploration of venus can be the next ground breaking scientific discovery yet. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c3b9fe8dbb10,28B90FB1EE8C,Why should you become a Seagoing Cowboy? Well first let me tell you about a boy named Luke who was a Seagoing Cowboy. A Seagoing Cowboy is on this boat with other Seagoing Cowboys. To go help Europe where World War II just ended. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c224ce987211,28B90FB1EE8C,"They were heading over to Europe because, many countries over there were ruined. So they were coming over to bring them food supplies, animals, and more ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f78070b110c,28B90FB1EE8C,"If you love to help, this would be something for you that you would enjoy ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb35d8836a09,28B90FB1EE8C,When Luke was on the boat he had a job to do. He had to feed the animals and keep them healthy. He also had to clean the animals and keep there stalls clean. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00bf0f5c4ad9,28B90FB1EE8C,When your a Seagoing Cowboy you have a big responsibility. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a0c8eac10cb,28B90FB1EE8C,A Seagoing Cowboy wasn't always working. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1a95d6c84d9,28B90FB1EE8C,"When they unloaded the animals and were heading back there was an empty space. So sometimes the cowboys played games. Like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fincing, boxing, and more. Luke always enjoyed that part. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c99cc9c0b1d7,28B90FB1EE8C,So this is what a Seagoing Cowboy is and what he does. If your someone who's willing to be on a boat for a long time and take care of animals and if you also love to help people. This job is perfect for you. While your on the boat you get to make new friends and explore unique places. It was just a big adevnture. Also if you love dealing with animals this is another good reason to become a Seagoing Cowboy ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dea669f3c6c7,28B90FB1EE8C,"Luke loved being a Seagoing Cowboy and if you have the heart like Luke, this is the job for you. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ffd60b4fc097,28DB8FB12DF2,"Well the advantages of limiting car usage is that you can walk to stores that are closer near by, without the need to turn on your car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a194a33a1769,28DB8FB12DF2,"Mostly the primary car limiting factor is for not to pay for gasoline  and gasoline  taxes. In the United States the Eviromental Protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" comunnitiues to limit cars all around the world. The goverment expects buses and taxis to play a much better role on giving trasportation to citizens that cannot afford a car. The goverment says that 80% of the bills payment by them is going to fix highways and that only 20% of the other bills they use it for transport. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f84b446b13b2,28DB8FB12DF2,"Paris enforces a driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Motorist with numbered licensed plates were ordered to leave their cars at there house or pay a fine of 31$. For this enforces over 4,000 drivers were fined. More than 20 peoplae got theit cars impounded for their reaction to the fine of paris. Diesel fuel company was blamed since France has a tax policy that favors diesel  over gasoline. Diesel fuel company makes up 67% of vehicles in France. For this kind of behavior Delivery companies complained for loss of buisness. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a2841162a3b0,28DB8FB12DF2,"Bogota and colombia set out as a program to spread out the car-free day leaving the sreets of this capital city clear of no traffic jams. The goal for this countries is to promote traspotantion and reduce the smog. The violators for these rules are going to be charged with 25% fine. Uneven  sidewalks have been replaced by broad (smooth sidewalks), Rush our restrictions have dramatically cut traffic and new restaurants and upsacle  shopping districs  have croped up. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cbc0c83e346,28DB8FB12DF2,"The end of the car culture president obama ambitious goals is to curb the united states green house gas emmisions. Some recrent studies suggest that americans ar buyinga few more cars than usual, Driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.                     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dfca6c1fdf7a,28E2327785FC,"In today's day and age, we are privileged to have the ability to drive vehicles anywhere that we please. The use of technology gave us the responsibility of driving. With that being said the responsibility of driving is very important because you're not only putting your life at risk, but also other drivers on the road. There can be many distractions while you are driving which can cause you to wreck and be seriously injured from it. One of the biggest distractions in today's age is the use of cellphones. With the improvements made to technology, you can use cellphones anywhere on the road, which causes it to be the number one distraction. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+01da3398695d,28E2327785FC,"I personally feel that the use of technology should not be allowed while driving unless it is under an extreme circumstance. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+8a207493ebf9,28E2327785FC,"To begin, one of the main reasons that causes cellphones to be one of the most distracting items is due to the texting and driving ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5621bf4dccad,28E2327785FC,"According to the National Safety Council they reported that ""cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year"". They also reported that ""nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. With those outrageously high statistics, I strongly agree with the idea of doing away with cellphones while driving. Also, 94 percent of drivers support a ban on texting while driving and 74 percent support a ban on hand held cell phone use. Having that high of a support percentage shows that are many other people who feel the same as I do. It is a very dangerous problem that is going on in todays day. With myself being a high school student and driver, I can first hand tell you this is a major proem with teens. I see many of my friends and also other students of my school using their cellphones while there driving and putting themselves in dangerous situations. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fcaac5f36deb,28E2327785FC,"As the majority of people know the using your phone is very dangerous and also distracting. However, with the teen's situations there are 16-year old's and older who are not that experienced with driving but are also more easily distracted then adults ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+32b84c28a2f6,28E2327785FC,"There was a poll made by AAA saying that ""94 percent of teen drivers know the dangers of using their phone while driving and up to 34 percent admitted to doing it anyway"". With this kind of statistic just proves the point of not allowing any use of a phone in a motor vehicle ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aebd4b6390c2,28E2327785FC,"There are many other safe and focused drivers on the road, who are following all the rules of the road. Those careful drivers have also been the victims and ended up being seriously injured from the distracted driving with phones and also many other reasons. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0807ee0ccc99,28E2327785FC,"I personally have an example to give with this problem. My Cousin was killed by a driver who was going down a road, speeding in the rain, and also texting while driving on top of all that. Phones being used in motorized vehicles is a serious issue and luckily a law has passed in the state of Georgia, stopping the use of them in cars, but hopefully people will start to follow that law. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43043a6df633,28E2327785FC,"There are plenty of other distractions that go on when driving a motorized vehicle, but the use of phones is most caused. These deaths and accidents from distracted driving with your phones can be very managed. If people were to follow the law of not using them in the car and to be more careful then these outrages percentages will become more and more less. Also, I would like to express the fact that there are many options in vehicles that allow you to use your devices via Bluetooth and voice control. So, if there was an emergency you can answer and talk on the phone without even having to pick up your phone and looking away. This concludes my essay I strongly believe in not using your devices while driving and I hope to have expressed the effect is has. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1054d44d5373,291AAEA628E1,"""Venus is the closest planet to earths in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9985c37e3ca8,291AAEA628E1,"The author is sayin sinse venus is basicly another copy of earth will extra extreme features, we should still look into it. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+5b1b1d785e67,291AAEA628E1,"Venus are acid rain, 800 defrees fahrenheit and has only 3% of oxygen and 97% carbon dioxide. ""Astronomers are fasinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in out solar system. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5dcb9a86ac29,291AAEA628E1,The aurthor explains why people are so interested in venus and why they want to study and look more into the planet and its possabilities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+219897bb3d97,291AAEA628E1,"Now people know that venus is not fit for life forms now. Even people who have gotten close anough to venus couldnt get even close to study the surface of venus. They dont get a whole lot of time to look at venus because of its light and how bright it is, if people attempted to take a photo of venus it would not come out how they wanted. They only way we get any idea of venus and its surface is from the human eye. We are never able to get close anough for samples because we would need to get extremely close and we cant because of its heat, gases. Venus could easily burn through most metals from earth, but astronomers think using old technology or a mechanical computer could help figure out more on venus. The mechanical computer actually doesnt involve electronical equipment. Thats how the parts to the mechanical computer is made, is by heat, pressure and other types of forces ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f04c9644e62,291AAEA628E1,"People think just because its dangerous to go to venus, doesnt mean we cant attempt it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+42c9c8f2d24c,291AAEA628E1,"They also say, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" Telling us that its not possible and if you think about it, it could happen and can be possible to travel to venus. NASA has been thinking of ways to build a ship that could with stand venus and its heat an pressure, and how to make it safe anough to be able to get there and collect supplies and leave without being in any type of harm. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e268745c0035,2971AA64D618,The author very well supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. They are very pasionate about the idea because they provide lots of facts and reasoning to further support the claim. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3206acd1e6cd,2971AA64D618,"The author uses support mainly focused on the idea in paragraphs 4, 5, and 6.
+
+In paragraph 4, the author said that Venus is theorized to once be covered in water, able to provide homes for all sorts of little organisms. They also say that Venus might have been the ""most Earth-like planet in our solar system."" They compared it to Earth even more because of how it has a rocky surface and has similar valleys, mountains, and craters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c15ec2bf33d5,2971AA64D618,The author spent time comparing Venus to Earth's surface and features for remote resembalance. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f6608f7efa4,2971AA64D618,"Later, in paragraph 5, the author mentions how NASA (The National Aeronautics and Space Administration) has ""one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+99de39fbd2d9,2971AA64D618,"This furthers the point more that NASA is also trying to send humans to go visit and study our planet's ""twin"". The author then goes on, proceeding to help our visualization of NASA's plan, telling the reader that NASA would not directly put humans on Venus's surface, but rather have them float in a blimp-like vehicle above the startpoint of Venus's weather and ""avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up ad out of their way."" The author lastly pointed out how, even with the toasty weather, Venus' surface is still survivable for humans, even though it's not full of easy conditions. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe3d44bf34d9,2971AA64D618,"Moreover, the author gives reasoning that ""peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannnot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective."" Researchers could also not be able to take any samples of anything from Venus from a distance if NASA were to proceed with the blimp-like plan, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9764b3146cbb,2971AA64D618,"the researchers would have no other choice but to go down onto Venus to take samples, even though it's dangerous. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2a50afb7e59,2971AA64D618,"The author demonstrates how the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by explaining many supporting reasons. They make it obvious that Venus is indeed safe to visit under the right precautions and that, with all the facts provided in paragraphs 4,5, and 6, it is a planet that us survivable for humans. The author supports thier standpoint fairly well with all the information they provided, even referencing NASA. This author fairly supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+116f5de67a60,2A53E83B0090,"- The author does support the idea very well of studying Venus is worthy of pursuit despite the dangers. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+d89058037a84,2A53E83B0090,"- Venus is a cloud draped planet, it is often referred as Earth's twin because Venus is the closest planet to Earth and sometimes Mars, humans sent spacecraft to Venus but unmanned because not one single spaceship has touched down in Venus in three decades, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e043beef219e,2A53E83B0090,humans have to study everything about Venus because of Venus's reputation it is a very challenging planet. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+00a8fc1d7501,2A53E83B0090,"Venus was used to be the most Earth-like planet in our solar system because long ago it was covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a93d47e58f63,2A53E83B0090,"Venus still has some features such as valleys, mountains, and craters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd8b59fdfd51,2A53E83B0090,NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+705fbc0d4d3b,2A53E83B0090,Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b544f65d867,2A53E83B0090,"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidating endeavors ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f59ca4df68a9,2A624BC3D806,"Scientist know that the face is created by something else, but someone thinks aliens created it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+eca9dc29ac87,2A624BC3D806,"I don't think aliens can do that. Many things could be the cause of the face on Mars, but I'm sure it's not aliens ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f18773ee13a2,2A624BC3D806,"Scientist have not proven that aliens are even real yet. If aliens were real scientist would know about it, and they might try to capture one ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00dda6612cfb,2A624BC3D806,"The face would of been causes by wind, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+67eaac0b5574,2A624BC3D806,"the spacecraft, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fed5f6b08ea3,2A624BC3D806,or it could of been a natural landform. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+315289b47c81,2A624BC3D806,The face on Mars could have been caused by the wind ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+809a902c84f8,2A624BC3D806,"When planets rotate it could have cause some wind, and the wind could start to form piles of dirt. The dirt could have been moved into the shape of a face. The shadows give it an illusion of eye, nose, and mouth. The face didn't have any footprints around it so aliens couldn't done it. On Earth the wind blows, and pollen from one flower goes to another. Dirt on Mars could of blew to one area, and it could form a face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2719e2841d6f,2A624BC3D806,Spacecrafts flying around Mars could have cause the face to appear. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0743fe29043,2A624BC3D806,The air that is blowing out of the spacecraft could of blown the dirt into piles. Piles of dirts can form since the scapecraft is big. When the scapecraft takes off it could form the face because when air is blown out it leaves a mark. A spacecraft couldn't have left a mark by the face. The fuel on the spacecraft could of left a mark after blasting off Mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7741dff239e1,2A624BC3D806,The face on Mars could be there naturally ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbd1196957d2,2A624BC3D806,"It is the third planet from the sun. If there's any volcanoes; lava can explode out of it. Aliens wouldn't come out, and randomly make a face to scare people. The face on Mars must be natural because I don't believe that aliens are real. If aliens are real we probably would have seen one by now. Aliens can't be alive; if they were alive they would have to find food sometime. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a28ac27206ba,2A624BC3D806,"However, the face could be have been maded by aliens. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2f9fcd986df6,2A624BC3D806,I'm stil shocked that people think they're real. I've never seen one before ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9028eacf00d3,2A624BC3D806,"aliens could be able to fly, and they don't have to touch the ground. The could pick up the dirt, and place it where ever they want to form the face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+22542e6f7e81,2A624BC3D806,"Inconclusion I still don't believe in aliens, but something had to happen to Mars. It could of been a natural landform or it could of been a spacecraft flying around Mars. They world may never know how the face was created, but I'm positive that aliens didn't create it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dcdea329cada,2A665076893F,Would you ever want to live on another planet if humans and other life could live on it ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+16c739ffc434,2A665076893F,"The author well supports his idea about ""The Challange of Exploring Venus"". 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+46703bab7a65,2A665076893F,There would be a little chance of any human or life to live on venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b651ad11f036,2A665076893F,"On venus the planet reamins unliveable to human. In the many times they sent spacecrafts to venus, venus had claimed the lives of the people inside the spacecraft. Since then NASA would not send another space shuttle to venus and it has been like that for 3 decades now. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc7a8ae3231e,2A665076893F,"The planet venus also known as the ""Evening star"" is one of the brightes in the night sky. Venus is also like a twin of earth the characteristics of this planet is alike except for the speed and the size.
+
+A thick atmosphere of about 97% of carbon dioxide covers the planet venus. When you pass that the surface of the earth is 800 degrees fahrenheit and verry deadly to any creacher that lives on earth. the atmospheric pressure is 90% than what we experience here. So why do scientist still study and figure out how life can form on this planet? well...Scientist want to study this planet because they believe it was similar and an earth-like planet. When the planet was and Earth-like planet it could have supported the life that lives on the actual earth now. On venus there were oceans,rivers,valleys,and ect. could we return to this planet? Scientist say that returning to earth is indisputable. Scients also want to figure out how they can send people there and be successfull? NASA want to design a blimp like vhical that can hover over venus without touching the unbarable ground but would give little insight of the planet. Scientist could not take samples of rock or gas or anything eles. Many researchers are tryin to come up with an idea so that they can get all their information on venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f6e3c92281bf,2A665076893F,"
+All in all, the author supports the idea of the life on venus and the past with great details that backs it up. Also that the author wants the readers to know that giving up on something will not help you succeed but to keep working on what you are trying to achive to get something great out of it and to figure out how to bypass the obsticals. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+122f0b90c2ee,2A7C4A1CBA41,"One day a student finds out that her principal has decided all students must participate in an extracurricular activity. She learns that an extracurricular activity is a club or sport that students engage in outside of school. While some students say that this is a good decision, others argue that they are not interested in any of the activities available and that it will be a waste of their free time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3a699e69c44c,2A7C4A1CBA41,I agree with this decision as requiring students to participate in an extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+15fdd3940449,2A7C4A1CBA41,"will keep them occupied, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bd5084ce1326,2A7C4A1CBA41,"allow them to meet new people, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+26bfee9afbe4,2A7C4A1CBA41,"help them find a new hobby. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+944e251059ec,2A7C4A1CBA41,"many students may not be physically active due to the fact that they do not have the motivation or immediate need to be. However, by joining their local soccer team they will have a reason to be active while still having fun participating. Students who do not have any clubs to participate in may also attempt to fill in their free time with unsafe activities such as trying a drug or joining a gang. Extracurricular activities would reduce this behavior as it will fill in this time with safe activities and help students find an interest that they can participate in for the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+96c1f723ec08,2A7C4A1CBA41,"This has personally happened to me during the seventh grade. Crocheting has always been a hobby of mine, but I never knew many people who shared the same interest as me. Due to this, I had always participated in the activity alone. When I found out that my school had a Fiber Arts club, I joined it to see what it was like. What I had discovered was that there where many people I knew who shared the same interest as me without my knowledge. This resulted in me forming closer bonds with them and meeting new people who became my friends in the future. Students should be required to participate in an extracurricular activity because a student joining a club that interests them will allow them to grow their passion while meeting new people. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7593e7d3bb92,2A7C4A1CBA41,"Despite a student not having a hobby that is provided through an extracurricular activity, by joining a club they may discover a new passion. For example, the Fiber Arts club I had joined also included knitting and felting activities. While at first I was only focused on doing what I was comfortable with, I soon got interested in the other activities that were available. Through this, I discovered new hobbies I still enjoy to this day which other students may also experience. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0afc20e8df1c,2A7C4A1CBA41,"
+Making extracurricular activities mandatory will be beneficial to students as it will keep them occupied, allow them to meet people who share their interests, and lead to new hobbies being discovered. When students participate in extracurricular activities, it reduces risky actions they may perform out of boredom. Joining a club may also lead to them meeting people with the same interests, or even discovering a new interest. I agree with the principal's decision of requiring the participation of extracurricular activities as it will benefit the students who participate in them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+839aebc5a4ab,2AA857755DA3,In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the pursuit despite the danger the author include that thar are almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide is on venus and the temperes average over 800 dergrees fahrenheit. NASA is telling us like how it not liveabul on venus. venus has the hottest suface temperature of any plantet in our solar system. NASA has been sening thing to Venus but the hostile conditions on the surface of venus is bad so NASA idea for sending thing to venus is having vehicl hovering 30 or so mile above the roiling landscape. having vehicl hovering over the landscape of venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f70a6f53b047,2AA857755DA3,"The text also state even a vehicl will have so much time to hovering over venus because the light can't penetrate the dense atmosphere. More importantly resher can't take anything because it is dense atmosphere. Fot them to seeking any info thay would have to get up close and personal despite the risks. Having knowledge fo venus meney researcher are working on some simplifed electronice.
+
+The National Aeronautis and space Administration have a idea for sending humans with haveing bad condush. At Venus temperatures would be around 170 degrees fahrenheit. Stat frome the text researchers are working on innvations that would alloe our mechines to last longer enought to contribute meningfully to our knowedge of Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7bf6762cac0b,2AAE2550DDAD,I am a scientist at NASA who is trying to tell you that the landform you saw on mars is nothing more than just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e73d252d5ee2,2AAE2550DDAD,It may look like a face ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3a3086b3b1e0,2AAE2550DDAD,but it is really not. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+192935d1de1d,2AAE2550DDAD,"What it really is, is a natural landform that our viking took a picture of on one side of mars. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bfba2a7692f4,2AAE2550DDAD,"The picture that you saw is nothing more than a picture taken at the right moment so that it makes it look like that mars has a face. The reason why it looks like it has a face is because the picture was taken at the moment on when the landform had a shadow at the certain places of the landform to make it look like it has eyes,nose, and a mouth. If you look at the picture from 1976 you can see that it shows more of the face and that it does look like a face. But then if you look at the picture taken at 1998 and 2001 you can see that the natural landform on mars is starting to break up and that the shadow on it is now sarting to fade away. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2bdd9048b2a,2AAE2550DDAD,So you won't have to worry about aliens giving out a message to us saying anything bad. It's nothing more than just a natural landform and a picture taken at the right moment. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e09d71f69419,2AD1E61D9F7E,It's very fun and educational to travel ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bcea4cc10030,2AD1E61D9F7E,"Luke was a solider in World War 1 and he was stationed in Europe,during this time war was going on and this wasn't the best time to visit there. But it's a more safe invorment and is known for it's history including the ""World War 1"". When you've had a lot going on at work, just want to do something nice for the kids,or even just tired of the weather a vaction is perfect for many reasons such as the ones I've mentioned. It's also very easy to become stressed and overwheled by work and school;its just best to take a break for it all. You can just go to a beach on an tropical Island or a jungle then come back to a fresh start ready to go,before you know you'll already be planing your next trip back or somewhere esle. You'll also get to meet new people around the world maybe you'll decide to move there. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8185d517c41,2AD1E61D9F7E,its great to travel hopfully you'll concider it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2cf887842519,2B015051803E,While student take a break from school there are teacher want student to continue to lean even their break from school. Some school require student to do summer projects to assure they continue learning even during break. Should these project be teacher or student designed? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fd5db5cfd0a8,2B015051803E,The Summer Project should be student designed during break. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b91966fcdfb8,2B015051803E,Why should this summer project should be student designed not teacher designed? If student have a choice of who came up an idea to write about they would most likely choose them self. This summer project due til student go back to school telling that student have lot of time to come up with an idea to write about. Student can come with an idea quickly because they can what they do and write about that they also can write what they do during the break ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b667453b07cc,2B015051803E,Since this is student designed student can start this project anytime they want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d2d987377c9,2B015051803E,If the student start their summer project student can be creative with their work by putting effort into it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+60511dcd29fb,2B015051803E,"student can choose if they want to do it colorful and creative or plain student have a choice if they want their work all bright and pretty or simple and plain. If the student choose colorful and creative there work might include with picture, color, detail, and what they might do during break showing that whoever made this work put a lot of thought and effort into it. If the student want to be simple with their work they might include white background, all word telling what they do during break, and a lot of mess of pencil mark. whatever they choose to be creative or not they will end up using their head to come up with these idea and student can make their project exciting or boring it up to them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28817003bf5b,2B015051803E,If student do this summer project and let the student to do their designed it will show that student put a lot of work into their project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fc7cc64182f,2B015051803E,"The most difficult part of this project is come up with good idea to do. Coming up idea can be hard and stressful it show that student put a lot of thought into their work. While student work on their design something they think what would be great to put into their design like color if so what kind would be best, picture if so what kind,and patter. After they finish student need to check if they like it or not and they have to check if they any mistake. When you look at the work it show student put a lot of thought in their project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bc460b6ac4e,2B015051803E,"Some school require student to do summer projects to assure they continue learning even during break, should these project be teacher or student designed. During break the Summer Project should be student designed. student can start this project anytime they like, they can make their design exciting or boring, and show that student put a lot of effort into their work. If student have a choice of teacher give idea to write about or student come up with one what would you choose? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+414a22350b67,2B23459A3938,"Luke took a trip with a friend and he went to may uneque places as a part of the
+
+UNRRA AKA the united Nations
+
+Relif and Rehabitation Administration ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+08928f58eaa9,2B23459A3938,Would'nt you love to be on a cattle boat and sail to unique places and help people in need? In the passage Luke does exactally that. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5d81327805e1,2B23459A3938,"He sailed across to many places providing food, cattle and shelter for the people and animals lost there food and homes in the war. Just imagine how much you would others that had just experianced alot of pain ina war and had lost there homes and had no food to eat of no place to sleep and may have even lost friends and family. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58c22416223b,2B23459A3938,In this passage Luke is also worryed about him having to go into the tmillitary because of his age and at the time you would often be shiped off to boot camps and millitary schools at the age of 18. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9bd1a639f25,2B23459A3938,The main idea of this passage is a man and Luke going to sea to help others in need of food and shelter. One of the many places they went where New Orleans they arrived in New Orleans in 1945 where they where told to go to and take 335 horses and food items for the hoses so they didnt die on the way to New Orleans.                  ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4460a580b29b,2B2696900DDF,"Would you like if your emotions are being detected withouht your consetiment? Technology is every day beging more capable of new things, in terms of artificial intelligenece. The new software has been developled so that it can read or decode the emotions of others. Dr. Eckman has classified six bassic emotions - happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-, he assocciated each emotion with movements on the facial muscles.
+
+It is important to know how the muscles in our body , in our face works , and what an amazing way to know through technology. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4ed33ad9cc2a,2B2696900DDF,"But at the point to that technology knows what are your emotions to then use them on ""what you need"" is not correct ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d90249b4cee4,2B2696900DDF,I am not saying that when we want to search about emotions through technology there should not be anything on it. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a621e55fed81,2B2696900DDF,But what if we are trying to hide emotions for our or others good and technology just cames and reads or decodes your emotions how would you feel? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0c06f173cf24,2B2696900DDF,"It is also important to know the basic of emotions, because that how you express yourself.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8b8d7d75dcad,2B3601A69135,"A danger of ecploring Venus is that the temperature is very high that hummans might not handle, and has the hottest surface. ""On the planets surface, temperatures verage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+357fbf22e0af,2B3601A69135,"I think that we should explore Venus because we should be able to know all of our solar system, but it will be challenging, because of the temperatures, and the pressure. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+6274963c2980,2B3601A69135,I like the idea of a havor craft to avoide the hot surface. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6c900c058886,2B3601A69135,"""a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.""
+
+The only bad thing would be is that what if the hover craft breaks down then they would crash, we dont even know if Venus has spitting lava of the ground ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20d3d38165f4,2B3601A69135,"Another example of why exploring Venus is a good idea, is that we can discover new speiceys or materials, mabye even find if there were ancient life on Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d91675b6bc51,2B3601A69135,"I think that exploring Venus would become hisory, because I think that Venus is dangerus place like the temperature, the surface, and even more dangeruse things on that planet that we dont know of or visios speices. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3e049f8cdfbe,2B48EAC02BF3,Do you ever think that exploring a planet far from home is worth it? Astronauts take on the challenege to travel to Venus and to explore the mysteries of the planet ,Lead,Effective,,,
+5e53f0f2791e,2B48EAC02BF3,The author supports the idea of taking the challenge to Venus by stating that the planet is worth studying for regardless of what dangers pursue them ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c0628aa5f77f,2B48EAC02BF3,Most astronauts from NASA are fascinated about the idea of the exploration of Venus ,Claim,Effective,,,
+33715acceb73,2B48EAC02BF3,"In article it says,"" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it way well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b23ed33d1982,2B48EAC02BF3,"In addition, it also says,"" Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ded217fd1f1,2B48EAC02BF3,There are a lot of astronauts in NASA that are willing to take on the challenge to Venus and NASA has already been simulatiing prototypes to withstand the conditions similar to Venus ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b04d5996c3f9,2B48EAC02BF3,"The planet is not just fascinating. it's also really dangerous for astronauts to travel there.
+
+Exploring Venus is really dangerous that no one will be able to survive with such harsh conditions the astronauts have to face ",Claim,Effective,,,
+433acbe54454,2B48EAC02BF3,"In the text it says, "" Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" In addition, the article also states, ""Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun."" The conditions on that planet Venus are much worse than on Eath, the planet contains such heat that it is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+024634530ca5,2B48EAC02BF3,"For conclusion, there are a lot of dangers and obstacles that the astronauts need to prepare for if the astronauts want to accomplish the challeneg to explore Venus. The author supports the idea of taking the challenge to Venus by stating that the planet is worth studying for regardless of what dangerspursue them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7ae024edc07,2B4BE109A9D7,"Many cause of limited car usage tends to have less people on the streets. Near the French and Swiss borders ; streets and driveways and home garages were not allowed for free parking. It forced people to park in places where it was usually crowded. Most people did not like the parking rules. They either rode their bikes or walked back and forth to get to their destination. Later after that, many people were very upset with the parking rules, that alot of them decided to sell their car so they could park wherever and that had opened spaces for multiple cars to transpass the roads at the same time.
+
+Same thing in Bogota, Columbia but the problem they had, was the pollution in the air. Columbians rode on buses with other people because the believed it was safer than being in a car and getting in an accident. Paris had the same problem, except they were fined to be driving. About 4,000 drivers were fined and others cars were to be impounded for arguing about being fined. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6b36f69acc7,2B4BE109A9D7,"I think the better way for the car problems, is to have all people discuss the problems and explain what is best for other people. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+ff9f15b87c68,2B4BE109A9D7,The solution near French and Swiss border is to let people park wherever they like and Columbia to clean up their pollution so they can live through fresh and safer enviroment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+671335812c51,2B5560516314,"The ""Facial Action Conding System"" would be a good technique for teachers to see if the students were paying attention during class, and if they were not how could they help him improve. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+470d36adcf48,2B5560516314,"Using this system would be beneficial for all in the class room because they will be aware of it and if something bad happens they can see the video tape.
+
+The system of recognizion is based to describe your emotions on certain things like as, if someone is not feeling well or if they need help with their work. We as humans, have a different variety of emotions that we can easily detect just by looking at their face. Most people will have the same face reaction all day meaning, if someone has a angry face and someone ask him if everything is ok, his respond is yes, is that his emotions and feelings do not interacts with his face reaction. In the Mona Lisa smile you can see like a pervert smile but at the same time, an inoccent. Determining different emotions associated with the facial muslces can truly help teachers to ditermine basic and normal emotions but also to see mixed emotions. As the Author says, ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal."", this means that not everyone will demonstraste how they feel in the inside, which not all students will have the same reaction during school and classes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3de93abd240,2B5560516314,"In conclusion, the facial action of recognition is some how bad, because students can act different if they know that there is a digital system recording them all the time, and can be good for them to pay more attention in class. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ff63922fa661,2B573F9EF4B0,"Because Venus has all proprties that humans requied to inhabit.
+
+Also, Venus had an extremely temperatures that humans can't survived.
+
+As the author said ""the temperature of Venus pass the 170 degress fahrentheid"", this means that humans can't resist this temperatures.
+
+Years ago scientist fund something interesting in Venus but also dangereous, venus can be inhabit???, how we can travel to Venus???
+
+Also the Nasa do programs to send people to Venus and study the ecosism.
+
+Venus the secund planet of the solar sistem. Scientis fund that Venus maybe can be inhabit, because they fund properties that Earth posees. But now Venus is like pangea, a dangerous planet with dangerous gasees, earthquakes, etc.
+
+and now, the humanity want to know how to lived in Venus. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9bdd2ecf7319,2B573F9EF4B0,"Venus is a planet that we can study, survived etc. But also it take a lot of time to do programs and prepare the people, also we are close to put the first step on Venus.
+
+thank you.... ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4cbd301cdeb4,2B682084579E,"Summer break for students can be a very extensive time period, and during this time students tend to halt the learning process. Consequently, select schools require students to complete a summer project to ensure they do not stop learning over the long break. The projects can be assigned by the teacher or chosen by the student, this varies depending on what the teacher wants you to do. Upon receiving a Teacher-designed project, students will all have to complete the same project opposed to student-designed projects where the project is innovated by the student and it is most probable to see a majority of students with vastly different projects. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e0465eb37bbb,2B682084579E,"If I were to have to complete a summer project, I would want it to be a teacher-designed project. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+183503946997,2B682084579E,executing a teacher-designed project would be less stressful than it would be opposed to it being student-designed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f9213f229f8f,2B682084579E,"When a teacher assigns you a project, it has more than likely been executed in the past. for that reason, it will undoubtedly make researching for the project go a lot smoother than it would if you are researching something that has never been done. During the summer break, students are busy playing video games, relaxing at the beach, and hanging out with friends, with that being said it will be less stressful to just carry out a project you have been assigned, instead of having to spend time brainstorming. Not only do you have to discover the project in general from scratch when doing a student-designed project, but you have ponder about how you are going to conduct the project itself, and this process can take days off of students precious summer break. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e197fbee4bd0,2B682084579E,"one students self innovated project will be different from another, leaving no opportunity to get support from other classmates. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d37c55df8246,2B682084579E,"Conducting a teacher-designed project will give you the opportunity to share ideas with fellow classmates, for the reason that you will all be working on the same project. Teacher-designed projects also give light to the idea of having a partner. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88ecd1380ead,2B682084579E,"Organization is another viable issue, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+804c5c70dff5,2B682084579E,"with a student-designed project you may get confused about how to carry out the project leaving it potentially incomplete or sloppy. On the other hand, if you are doing a teacher-designed project instructions will likely be clearer and you have will likely get a grading rubric to follow. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+216b6c58184e,2B682084579E,"Some opposed to this may say, ""I do not want to do a summer project anyways, therefore let me choose the topic"". I agree that the topic of the project may be more interesting if it is student-designed, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+63b38e1defcf,2B682084579E,"but if the project is teacher-designed you will learn more. Student designed-projects will not test the brain as much as a project that they know nothing about will. Moreover, students will be put to the test more if they have to research something that is beyond logic. Even though you will learn more doing a teacher-designed project it still the easier option. For that reason, teacher-designed projects are the better fit because the whole point of making students do a summer break project is to ensure that they learn as much as possible. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+175be662c1b6,2B682084579E,"although student-designed projects are helpful the teacher should be the one innovating these summer projects. Teacher-designed projects accomplish both being the least stressful and being the least tedious. In that light, they should undoubtedly be the way summer break projects are conducted. This summer break if students have to do projects it should be a teacher-designed project, not only for the benefit of the students but the teacher will also be able to grade the projects easier because all of the projects should be similar. To sum it all up, Teacher-designed projects are the clear winner, therefore if I ever have to do a summer project that is the way I would want it. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b04af630947f,2B7A8D15B50C,The face on mars was first found by the spacecraft called Viking one and was cirling mars when it found the face. alot of people belive it is a real artifact. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e2060d216b21,2B7A8D15B50C,NASA has took more pictures to prove that it is infact not an artifact. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33061f26611d,2B7A8D15B50C,People belive there just covering it up so pople wont know about it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6f14716a136b,2B7A8D15B50C,But that is not true it would benifit NASA if it were an true artifact. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aeaf72767ccb,2B7A8D15B50C,The face on mars is just a lndform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00821551d0ca,2B7A8D15B50C,"because of the pictures we took we could not see and form of building structure. one thing that brings me to this conclusion is the rocks and shadows made it look and seem very real. The text states ""...formed by shadows..."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebbd533531f6,2B7A8D15B50C,"Tv and other things are what is drawing the attention to the matter andthey are whats broadcasting to the world that it is real. The text states "" It starred in a hollywood film , appeared in books , magazines, radio talk shows..."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c17da9933400,2B7A8D15B50C,This brings me to the conclusion that infact it is not real but was made real by televison and other things. People just dontt wanna listen to the since behind it. If it where in fact real it would benifit NASA. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e3c2a5bd863f,2BAB4CB3573E,Cell phones have become very popular over the past years when it comes to texting and driving. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+60168b87b647,2BAB4CB3573E,The behavior is very dangerous and causes death do to not paying attention to the road ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b37a7c97797b,2BAB4CB3573E,They cause more crashes day by day. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5882fe83d25,2BAB4CB3573E,Then eventually this led to enforcement by the police of when you are caught texting and driving you will get a ticket ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2aabe7c99794,2BAB4CB3573E,This hurts victim family members by your mistake of texting and driving and killing the innocent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fac70db9483,2BAB4CB3573E,"The number one reason why people don't use a cellphone why driving, because its causes car crashes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c565edfdee3,2BAB4CB3573E,"You have to keep your eyes on the road at all time or it will lead to jail time!!! Driving under the age of 18 is illegal in most states. Another way that its dangerous is if you are drinking and driving. Which means that more people or dying each and other day. Reports have that 1.6 million crashes are caused because drivers text while driving. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+832c55029831,2BAB4CB3573E,People sometimes might argue with the fact they can multi-task well ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4d0ffc425767,2BAB4CB3573E,but that doesn't change the fact that many of teens and adults are at risk when you're behind the wheel. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3dbbd03a06fd,2BAB4CB3573E,"The number of deaths increase everyday do to drinking and driving as well. There is a specific time you can drive after drinking which is 5 hours to sure you're ok to drive without causing a crash. Which makes thousands of people dangerous drivers everyday fights the public!!! 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a64e8e75a1c7,2BAB4CB3573E,In conclusion texting and driving at the same time is putting yourself and others at risk because both yawl could lose your lives in a blink of an eye! 0ver the law that the police have created to save our lives which will make our environment or community safer.         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8c5b6748fdf5,2BB14634D9FE,"The ""Face on Mars"" was found during a search for a possible landing site for the sister ship of Viking 1,
+
+Pictures were taken during the search, a showy likeness of a human face was spotted.
+
+An enourmous head close to two miles from end to end, was looking back at the camera.
+
+Scientists believed it was just another Martian mesa, common around a region of Mars called Cydonia. But it had unusual shadows that made it look similar to an Egypt Pharaoh.
+
+The ""Face on Mars"" is a huge rock formation, which resembles a human head.
+
+Shadows gave the illusion of eyes, a nose, and a mouth, and because of this, it caused alot of attention to Mars. People believe that it was an alien monument, but proof showed that it was, just a natural landform. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59acf36594fa,2BB14634D9FE,"Few Scientists believe the Face was an alien artifact.
+
+Photographing Cydonia and the Face became a priorty for NASA.
+
+Eighteen years after the Viking missions ended, Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September, 1997.
+
+On April 5, 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin, and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team took a photo ten times sharper than the original Viking Photos in 1976.
+
+Thousands of web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site. To no surprise at all, revealed . . . a natural landform. No alien monument after all, Just rocks.
+
+When the photo was taken it was winter in April '98. A cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to look through wispy clouds to see the Face, skeptics believe that because of this the alien markings were hidden. As said in the article
+
+""Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maxium resolution.""
+
+The pixels in the 2001 image spans to 1.56 meters.
+
+While the best 1976 Viking photo had 43 meters per pixel.
+
+In a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, if there were objects on the ground in this picture, you could see what they were just by looking at it.
+
+The picture shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, commonly found around the American West.
+
+""It reminds me of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" says Garvin ""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2fab8fb6257f,2BC448B88B54,"In the year 1976, when Viking 1 space craft was taking photographs of possiable landing spots for Viking 2 spacecraft, they found a formation in a rock that looked like a human face. The shadows made the rock look like it had a nose, mouth, and two eyes, like a human. This was found in a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. The ""Head"" was nearly two miles from end to end, and it seemed to be starring back at the cameras.
+
+The controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab were probably quite surprised when this face popped up on their screens, looking them right in the eyes. This sensation was short lived. Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, which was common around Cydonia. The only difference with this one is it had unusal shadows that made it seem like an Egyptian Pharaoh. A few days later NASA unveiled the image for the public eye to see. The caption on this picture was ""Huge rock formation... which resembles a human head.... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose and a mouth."" NASA'S reasoning was that the picture would help engage public attraction to Mars.
+
+This public picture was soon a pop icon. It starred in Hollywood films, was in books, magazines, talk shows on the radio, and even haunted grogery store checkout lines for over 25 years. Some people think that this picture is evidence of life on Mars. Conspiracy theorist say that this is information NASA would rather hide. Defenders of the NASA budget wish that there was life on Mars, as this would make NASA more popular, and even richer, when people use the picture in books, movies, magazines, and more.
+
+Although most scientist believed the face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority to NASA, when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. Jim Garvin, cheif scientist, said that they felt like it was a right of taxpayers to see photographs of the face as soon as possiable. On April 5, 1998, Michael Malin snapped a photograph ten times sharper then the old one. This became popular with web surfers, as they were waiting for the first photo to show up on a JPL website. Only this picture showed what they were not wanting, a natural landform. This was not an alien momument after all.
+
+While most people were satisfied, others were not. They still think that NASA is still hiding evidence of an alien momument. The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998. The camera on board MGS had to peer though whispy clouds to see it. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden behind clouds on purpose, so that humans would not be able to see them. Mission controls planned to take another photograph of it. It is not easy work, and it is not easy to target Cydonia. They just do not pass the face very often.
+
+Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001, a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, MGS drew close enough for a second veiw. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the field of view.
+
+They used the cameras highest resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans at 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Vikings photo.""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size. So if there were objects on the ground such as airplanes or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could have seen what they were"" Said Jim Garvin.
+
+What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, which are landforms that are common around the American West. ""It reminds me of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho"" Says Garvin. ""Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height of the Face on Mars."" He added. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ed286398b719,2BC448B88B54,"So weather or not theFace is an alien landform or a rock formation, NASA does wish it was an alien landform, just to bring pupiclatiy to the Red Planet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4a314292d625,2BC448B88B54,"However, it is highly imposable for it to be an alien momument, as they would have to have oxygen to survive,and they would have to find plenty of food and water to also survive. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+571d9de5c5a8,2BE74BE251FE,"New technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Hold on! Can we actually ""calculate"" emoitons---like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel? Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit"". 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+82bef26f4a7f,2BE74BE251FE,"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on his or her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, ect. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. Perhaps Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms are a different sort of of ""Da Vinci Code""! 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d58a99e0758,2BE74BE251FE,I'm for the new technology Facial Action Coding System ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3584438a5d77,2BE74BE251FE,"I think is a good idea for computers to know if there owner is happy, mad, sad, and ect ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7df30e4b5734,2BE74BE251FE,"Heres a qoute from the article "" even thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression"" (like not smiling as broadly). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d17beb6b3d79,2C0D4A3D4590,"I disagree, because some times there is nothing there that interest ",Position,Adequate,,,
+db0c982244ca,2C0D4A3D4590,Many schools dont have a program that people like. So if they force some one to do something that they dont like it could make them frustrated. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f39e24ef051,2C0D4A3D4590,There is something good to it. It can make them try new stuff. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c9168850870b,2C0D4A3D4590,It can get them interested new jobs they can try. A new future they can try to achieve. it could also make them a more interesting person. More possible people talk to about the topic. But they could despise the topic. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd5624338c72,2C0D4A3D4590,Than forcing them in to it could make the hate it more. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7810d8593db3,2C0D4A3D4590,There could be some personal stuff that do's not let them join a club. some personal trauma that makes them less likely to join a club. it could also be that they just dont want to do it. Being part of a sports team is also very physically demanding. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d868caac10fc,2C0D4A3D4590,There is always chance they could not make it on the team ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2a0f1ee9938a,2C0D4A3D4590,Plus there is always a chance of being kicked out of the club or team. Plus if you try a sport out and figure out that you dont like it you can always quit. There is always a chance that the club could not even help you in the real world. There could be no real world implication ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8570bcc2a365,2C0D4A3D4590,some times people could like try new things out. People could also no like change in their schedule. Forcing stuff on people isnt the best option. There is always a chance they might like the club. You might make some new friends. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c9b9047b0eb8,2C2C377C45D0,The author gives good reasonings on why the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b1c5046f53f8,2C2C377C45D0,"The first reasoning that the author has is that way back when, Venus might have had open oceans and could have supported various forms of life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4908f685ae55,2C2C377C45D0,"Just like Earth does, the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feartures such as moutains, valleys, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80c96f9a127a,2C2C377C45D0,NASA has an exquisset idea for sending humans to study Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f6ef982b3c0,2C2C377C45D0,"Just picture an enormous blimp-like contraption that hovers 30 or so miles above all of the landscapes, all of the storms, we would be care free. Nothing to worry about except for the drastic temperatures of 170 degrees Fahrenheit that we all would still have to endure while we're there, but no worries we could always just fan eachother with a paper fan. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cf15e4027b0,2C2C377C45D0,"It 'll work the same I'm sure. We would have solar powered appliences so we wouldn't have to sorry about the everyday hassal of having to plug in, detangle, of trip over any more cords. This would be a major change for all of us drastic in fact, but still survivable. NASA has had some simpified electronics made of silicon carbide that have been tested in a chamber simulated the Venus's surface and has lasted for three weeks in such harsh and mild conditions ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4883c3c7e6fe,2C2C377C45D0,NASA would be making our living situations a lot easier to handle of Venus by creating all of this new technology today in this age/era ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+736f5230003f,2C2C377C45D0,"In clonclusion, NASA has outstanding creations that would be outstandingly suitable for the human race to live on Venus. Worry free, hardly any bills to pay, and all liveable cercumstances. Also that the author's idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of all of the dangers that come with The planet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a09fb10a981e,2C4BB3ACA451,i don't think its a bad way to test it i say they should test it to one classroom see how it works see what it can do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+541f0ed9e57b,2C4BB3ACA451,"so if you ever want to put theses in classroom's give it to one class to try them out and if they like it use but if they don't u can't do anything but make something better or something just like give it a diffenert name and shape, and size stuff like that beacuse you don't want to give it to a person that dose not like the idea of using it. say you have three classroom's and u want to see what's the odds of these classroom's using these so you test them for like 3 weeks see how use it see if they like do they need help using them so i think it would be great to have in classrooms as long as they like them and know's how to use them is the biggest part of this new product. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f0c5fb10e0e,2C7061AD8E4A,"My name is Proffesor Yado, and my colleague and I were discussing on the infamous ""Face on Mars"". My colleague believes in superstition and conspiracies so he stated that the face on Mars must be of extraterrestrial origin. I said that was porposterous, but my colleague continued to try and convince me to no availe. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa0308d502bd,2C7061AD8E4A,"I told my colleague there are many reasons why the some scientists and people thought the ""Face on Mars"" looked like a face. I then procedded to tell him my reasons. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+62bc82c3270a,2C7061AD8E4A,"First off, cameras at the time were not as advanced as they are today. The cameras of the day would ""distort the image and it would only capture the major features of the butte or mesa. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c9151ba16b17,2C7061AD8E4A,"The most recent image taken of the ""Face on Mars"" in 2001 looks very different from the original image taken in 1976. If there was a actual structure left by aliens, modern cameras would be able to see it. The the more modern cameras of today are able to see the more defining features of a object. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be83cb6dac05,2C7061AD8E4A,Secondly humans are remarkably good at seeing faces when there is not one there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f4ee5e5082e,2C7061AD8E4A,"When you look at a wall socket you can see what resembles a face when there is not one there. It is the same thing with the ""Face on Mars"". With the aid of shadows from the Sun, are ability to see faces when none are there, and the angle the picture was taken, the butte or mesa looks remarkably like a face or some alien made structure. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8032ca30698a,2C7061AD8E4A,In response to what I said my colleague had some things to say to try and disprove me. Due to my colleague believing in superstition and conspiracies he believed NASA and the government are hiding the truth from us. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f9161a000d53,2C7061AD8E4A,"He stated they were hiding this from us because of what happened with H.G. Wells The War of the Worlds, which caused a massive panic. The government don't want another mass panic so they have been keeping us away from the truth that aliens exist. My colleague also stated that possibly alien markings were hidden by haze as some other theorists thing so. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b6e5f9ae50d,2C7061AD8E4A,I thought that was perpostourous but my colleague still believed the theory of aliens existing. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b1274c53a0de,2C7061AD8E4A,"Even thoug hmy colleague still believes in the ""Face on Mars"" to be a alien made structure. I still believe it's only a butte or mesa. With my evindence of the ""Face on Mars"" only looking like a face due to the techonology of the time, the shadows of the sun, the angle the picture was taken, and our ability to see faces when none are there, I believe I have conclusive evidence that the ""Face on Mars is nothing but a butte or mesa. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+143c2b105729,2CF5EC4E36F2,There was no technology back when the Mona Lisa was made. They had pictures and the picture showed emotion. There are some people that can see the emotions of people and some are herd to see then others. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3afd16a3087c,2CF5EC4E36F2,They are making technology to read the emotional expressions and that it knowns when your lieing. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3cb1f11079c8,2CF5EC4E36F2,"There are pictures that show emotion, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b36245137a0d,2CF5EC4E36F2,"people that see other peoples emotion, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f991aac8088f,2CF5EC4E36F2,and now there making technology that reads emotional expressions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cdcaa7a43a69,2CF5EC4E36F2,"First, of there are pictures of people and there always will be. In those pictures you can see someones emotion and how someone is feeling. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6120a63977c4,2CF5EC4E36F2,"Back then they only had pictures to see. From theose pictures most artist and people could see peoples emotions, but it was meanly the artist that could read someones emotion. The artist could see throw someones fake smile or if it was real. That's why there pictures showed how many emotion she had. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f70df45c724,2CF5EC4E36F2,"Next, there are some people that can read others emotion and for it's hard or they can see them. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+df454430050a,2CF5EC4E36F2,"Everybody is different most people that read somebody's emotion is because there a love one or a every good friend and they can read your emotion. There is just other people that don't care. Most people should be able to see if your angry, sad or happy. Those emotions are easy to see, kids show it all the time even when there not feeling so good. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d9bf00756d2,2CF5EC4E36F2,"Finaly, there is technology being made that reads someones emotion. The technology even know's when it is a lie. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b5daeba38871,2CF5EC4E36F2,"So somebody can just take a picture of somebody and there emotion. There is going to be a person that lie's the technology. Technology isn't going to make you feel better. That person is going to need a love one or a close friend, to help them ou ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6aa7d30df30f,2CF5EC4E36F2,"There always going to be somebody close by that will help you out. Could be throw a picture and that could help you. Or a friends that sees you happy, sad, or mad. The technology might tell them there emotion, but wont help them out. There are pictures that show emotion, people that see other peoples emotion, and now there making technology that reads peoples emotional expressions.         ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fa3322609fb2,2CFBD4AA7BE5,What do you like to do after school? The answer is probably go home and relax. But wouldn't it be great if everyone did an extracurricular activity ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f2c86852f8b7,2CFBD4AA7BE5,Their is so much fun and exciting things to do other than just go home and relax for the rest of the day. I think kids should have to do extracurricular activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c1612cbe1f3f,2CFBD4AA7BE5,because you make new friends ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9002bcca94a0,2CFBD4AA7BE5,you help out your school ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1d533e7189c0,2CFBD4AA7BE5,it creates other opportunities ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+842e463906b1,2CFBD4AA7BE5,While doing extracurricular activities you can make new friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6da901820db7,2CFBD4AA7BE5,"Making new friends is bound to happen while doing extracurricular activities, you and another person are just going to click and get along with each other very well. Making friends with the people that do the same extracurricular as you can have a lot of benefits. Take this for example; I play football and my friend Generic_name doesn't. So when I try telling Generic_name about the struggles that I am going through on the football team or something important about the team, he can't help me with my problem because he is not involved. But, if I have a friend on the team then he can help me with my problems and I can also help with his or her problems. Overall, extracurricular activities help make friends that can help you through things. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a7f4bb966e0d,2CFBD4AA7BE5,Some extracurricular activities help out the school and the community a lot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b15e3c96b29,2CFBD4AA7BE5,"It may be in a small way but it still helps. Groups that make the yearbook or students that serve on the student council are helping the school out. They are helping to keep the school in order and to keep students happy. Other extracurricular activities like football and basketball help their school and community by winning games this helps the school make money, it helps the community by providing entertainment. Some schools even have environmental clubs that help the school, the community, and even the world. All in all, extracurricular activities help the school and community. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24a80dd58929,2CFBD4AA7BE5,When doing extracurricular activities you might find out that you are really good at something. People that are good at sports often get scholarships to play sports in college. You might write a school news paper and find out that you are a really good writer and could possibly become a writer or find another job that involves writing. Also doing these extracurricular activities will go on your resume and help you get into college. Extracurricular activities create so many opportunities it is outstanding. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31c1f02ffb47,2CFBD4AA7BE5,"extracurricular activities have a lot of benefits. They can help you make friends, help your school and community, and create new opportunities. People may not want to do extracurricular activities but it will help you out later on in life and you will have plenty of fun.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99ec7a3e4e08,2D08A68E70CD,I think that the author describes how technolgoy called Facial Action Coding System enables computer to idntify human emotions and expressions of the students in the classroom are valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+351f35cf0deb,2D08A68E70CD,"For example at the begging the line "" imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions."" Catches people attention ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+751ffa1d7630,2D08A68E70CD,"Another example that the author used that was included that was good was in paragrah one when it states that ""Shes 83 percent happy, 9percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This shows that the author included logos in his paragrah another way of having a valuable short. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d85fb9fc13c9,2D08A68E70CD,Third example has pathos catching peoples feelings or making them think being put into someone els shoes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c47818a64097,2D08A68E70CD,"Hold on! can we actually ""calculate""emotions-like math homework? and how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel"". The author also gave us examples of looking in the mirror. I think that the author gave details examples for the student to having in the classroom. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f714a0b33e9,2D10F2D7A580,"Driver good is very important for all people. In the united states' there are  much car and this provoke much accidents in the life of the people. The president Obama's say: in the united states' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in american behavior: recent studies suggest that americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.
+
+In the united states peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis by doug short of advisor perspectives, an investment research company. As april 2013 the nombers of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. Part of the explanation certainly lies in the recession,because cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway.''I think means something more fundamental is going on''.The transportation is the second largest source of Ameica's emissions, just behind power plants. But it could have negative implications for thr car industry. Diferent things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long -term cultural shift, said Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at drexel university and director of its mobilities research and policy center. She cities various factors:the internet makes telecommuting possible feel more connected without driving to meet friends. The precident Obama is very good with the country because this words what he say ser very important for the all people and the world.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d216e0232501,2D13EF90C1FA,"In paragraph 4 it says ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with Oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.
+
+The author also states that, Today, Venus still has some features hat are analogous to these on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, maountains, and craters. They recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, but a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. In paragraph 5 it informs us that NASA says, that the visit would not have easy conditions, but survuvable for humans.
+
+In paragraph 1 the author tells us that, Venus, sometimes called the ""Evening Star,"" si one of the brightest points of light in the sky, easy even for an amateur stargazer to spot. Although, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. The author also claims that Venus is the second planet from our sun. It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Also referred to as Earth's ""twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance too. The author also says ""Earth, Venus, Mars, our other plaetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus."" He also states that Venus is sometimes right arounf the corner, in space terms.
+
+In paragraph 2 the author claims ""Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challening planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us."" He also states that NASA has sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud- draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus more than three decades ago."" But NASA is still studying how they could get a better way to study Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e57cefa5a0a7,2D21E920F1B0,"I entered a program before called the seagoing cowboys how it all started though was because of my friend don reist. I was working two part time jobs at a grocery store and a bank and when my friend invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat.
+
+I got to travel a lot to. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7dbbe4466737,2D21E920F1B0,"I am asking you to join the program just like I did. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+ab7b8d6fe5e7,2D21E920F1B0,"(UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses,youngcows,and mules that were shipped overseas.) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4cf92bc017a4,2D21E920F1B0,That means you would get to help out other countries and their disasters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6249b31b77fd,2D21E920F1B0,you get to travel all kinds of places in the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ee8ca897d3b,2D21E920F1B0,"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the acroplis in Greece was special"". he says)which he is actually me ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a4f4ba73c40,2D21E920F1B0,"also found time to have fun on board, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db34a82db2d6,2D21E920F1B0,"especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty hold where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling, and games also helped pass time.) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+876b7682e312,2D21E920F1B0,So there are 3 reasons that I wrote out of why you should be a seagoing cowboy and if your a girl I suppose you could be a seagoing cowgirl. Now I am not forcing you to but just convincing you and I hope that convinced you because all of it is really true. So if you don't want to that's fine but if you do Great I didn't write all of that for nothing! ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b5d82a5f0eaa,2D35D2209C2C,The way that i see it is that the author put a lot of reseach into venus and study it ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+67209a94f734,2D35D2209C2C,some scientist still today though study the plant. And trying to find a way to go there but the tests that there getting back isnt good ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+37bc5043e1da,2D35D2209C2C,"like how in the article it said that ""no space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours "". 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+221b6d719ab2,2D35D2209C2C,So as there doing more tests they find out more things about the plant and try to look for a way to reach venus and to finally land on it . And to find out more stuff about venus up close . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+210e797a8165,2D35D2209C2C,"The other thing is they found out about venus is that "" a thick atomsphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus"" according to the article ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b43216a936d,2D35D2209C2C,And so that means that they also have to find out whats wrong with the air and how can they live in it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fc2a1fd11303,2D35D2209C2C,And venus it the hottest plant even though mercury closer to the sun ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+136fabba174a,2D35D2209C2C,venus wont really be safe for us . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d9ffe5d9d19c,2D35D2209C2C,But therefore scientists cant get close to venus cause of the plants but they will try to chance even though there a risk. They still though want to so that they can test the objects on the plant . And see if its safe for the future or something . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+783f568b890e,2D5E45654C18,"I think people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+902b906bc311,2D5E45654C18,you can have a lot of fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18d2b56d5f42,2D5E45654C18,You will have lots of fun and get to do rodeo on some cows yeha. You can ride those big horses and go really fast. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af1245347f92,2D5E45654C18,I went to a program kinda like this before and rode big horses and fished and rode boats. I got to playin the mud and it was funny and felt really weird. I went in swamps and saw some gators but nun in bad. I even got to see my uncle PROPER_NAME deer is cow out of the farm. Haha it was so funny ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e54e3d8b7ae,2D5E45654C18,You guys do should go to camps like these there very fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef7d866ab68e,2D5E45654C18,You have the best food out there too ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+013d58915f67,2D5E45654C18,"Fish, crab, spaghetti , gators, rabbits, squarles, and shrimp. That food is the best food in the world. You can eat anywhere you like. Bring your friends family anyone and enjoy that great food. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b6bae10d636,2D5E45654C18,"Oh almost forgot you can bring your sleeping bags, tint, pillows, blanking, or whatever, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3fbb3678b511,2D5E45654C18,you gone be sleepin in cabin. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b49aa3d88ba,2D5E45654C18,Don't worry though because it be extra warm in there. I enjoyed the last time I slept in a cabin. I slept a few nights and then one night I heard monster creeping on me and I peed down my leg. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8371fb4e09f7,2D5E45654C18,I really think you will want to go to that camp with the Cowboys. It will be really great and you get to ride horses and eat amazing food and sleep in a cabin. If you love to camp and go crazy then this is where you need to come. The Seagoing Cowboys. I gerinte you will have fun ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8449bc881833,2D5E45654C18,There al,so pools and ponds and stuff that you can have fun in. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+f1266a15769c,2D5E45654C18,These people travel for long time at time sol you'll be there for awhile.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d6c1d80cd13,2D5F50B0E765,"Everyone in life has been forced to do something that he or she does not want to do. No matter how hard the individual tried to get out of it, the individual still had to go through with the assignment. To complete the assignment, he or she will have to give up something. For example, if someone was forced to come in to work on a day off, he or she may have to give up spending time with family. Being forced to do something is never a fun experience. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+80ae67a418fb,2D5F50B0E765,Students should not be required to participate in an extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e73d48995ae0,2D5F50B0E765,"some may not be interested, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3a30db5c30ef,2D5F50B0E765,"some may not have transportation, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8fe679180f86,2D5F50B0E765,"students may begin to stress. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+28bcb5792ab7,2D5F50B0E765,"Participating in clubs or groups are not for everybody. If a student does not desire to participate in an extracurricular activity, he or she should not have to. If the student is forced to, he or she may not do any work. For example, a student was forced to participate in an after school club. During the club, the student would talk out and misbehave. The student was disrespectful to the club leader and acted in a disorderly manner. When asked, the student replied, ""I was forced to be here."" If students are required to participate in an extracurricular activity, a student may not do any work out of a lack of interest. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+440ab7a2c4de,2D5F50B0E765,This may happen because the student's parent could be busy. A lot of parents have to work late. They don't have suitable hours that will allow them to pick up or drop off their child at school. There have been countless times when students would stand outside waiting to be picked up from an after school activity. The students would stand outside for a long period of time. Standing outside without adult supervision can be dangerous for a student. A parent should not have to worry about getting his or her child home safely because the child was required to stay after school. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+222ae016d4de,2D5F50B0E765,"Some extracurricular clubs and groups require students to conduct a lot of work outside the club or group. In situations like this, students tend to worry about completing all work for their part of the group. For instance, students have different levels of productivity. Some can balance out school work and extracurricular work while others are not able to. If a student does not have high productivity, this may cause him or her to stress about all the work. While trying to balance out all this work, the students grades may begin to drop. This can lead to even more stress than the student can handle. Schools should not require students to participate in an extracurricular activity because some may begin to stress. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e82d3bfe674f,2D5F50B0E765,"Students should not be forced to participate in an extracurricular activity because some may not be interested and may not have a means of transportation. A student may also have trouble balancing out extracurricular work and school work. Though at the end of the day, everyone has his or her own purpose in life. It may be to do big things or some may want to do small things. It is not fair to be forced to do something that an individual may not want to do. Students have the right to choose their own path in life and to express themselves as they please.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+20591b89ad2d,2D644290FFF5,Studying venus is wrothy pursuit despite the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d7da98659b61,2D644290FFF5,venus is also named after a strip club but any who its sometimes is call the 'evening star' its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky .Venus is also a planet well a second planet from our sun ' earths twin'.A thick atmospheric of almost 97% carbon dioxide the clouds of highly sulfric acid in venus atmosphere on the planets surface the tempetauras avrage is over 800 fahrenheit and the atomsopheric pressure is 90 times then we experience in dusty indianapoils ok im done talkin about venus something naamed after a club bur anyways striving to meet the challange presented by venus has value not only because of the insight to ne gained on te planet itself this teacher in my testing room look like a allen so I think she from venus but alsoo because of human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3bf449c98f89,2D71611B9278,The faicl action coding seems like a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2977228082d3,2D71611B9278,My claim is that it would be cool to go into a classroom and be able to tell what mood your are in. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b6b4afb96d42,2D71611B9278,"It says in the passage ""a classroom computer could recognized when a student is becoming confused or bored."" That would be a really cool thing to do at school. I think its a good idea asnd I am not going to argue about this suggestion. If you can walk into a classroom and you can tell if a child is happy, sad, confused or even just bored you will be able to know if they are okay. If a child is sad you can try and help them and out and see what is going on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e03a58cefcb,2D71611B9278,"
+In the passage it says, ""hold on, we can actually calculate emotions."" well yes if you actually give it a try. It would be seriously so cool to know how someone feels just by looking at a screen when they walk into a classroom. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1391541dd2a3,2D71611B9278,"I think it would help some students, honestly if you tried this expirement. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a05b03efcdfc,2D71611B9278,"Students wouldn't know what to think if they had this in their classroom. None can just walk into a classroom and tell if they are happy or sad. It says that ""the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like humans."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99b0a0670d41,2D71611B9278,"They said that they have classified ""six basix emotions- happiness, surpirse, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This might help a lot of people out if they do this. If you can tell a kid is sad you can help the kid. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd5e32db8f0a,2D71611B9278,Maybe he or she is having problems at home and they need help but they don't say it. The facial action coding system might help people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73efb460bcf9,2D71611B9278,"It's a good idea, but it's actually a reall good expirement to test it out and see whats going to happen. You can alwyas take it out if it doesn't work out, or if it does you can keep doing what you are doing and you'll be able to see kids facial expressions and what they feel when they tell you they don't feel anything. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37579b470e15,2D71611B9278,"Facial Action Coding is just a different way to expirement different things about children. Maybe teachers can bump their classrooms up to funner and more satisfying things, because you will know if a kid is bored in your cass if they have that. It says that ""each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion)."" Let's just try the facial action coding out and see where everything goes, but it seems like it's going to go good. I totally agree and I don't argue with this expirement. You learn something new everyday.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+487c22d35207,2D73663127C2,"Innocent and young, children grow accustomed to the utilization of cars in society. Hot Wheelz, battery-powered Barbie SUVs, Hess Semi-trucks, and other deviations of play-friendly cars introduce the car culture to Americans from nearly the first day out of the womb. Mothers, fathers, aunts, uncles, neighbors, and grandparents depend on their cars daily. This reliance on cars consequently impacted America's environment ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f898ae1d3f81,2D73663127C2,"However, limiting car usage reduces society's carbon footprint, slowly eliminating the encompassing pollution ",Claim,Effective,,,
+156e2907d021,2D73663127C2,stress of the developed car culture ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65d5f6bedd50,2D73663127C2,"All vehicles alike release carbon emissions into the atmosphere, polluting the air and smogging our cities. Suburbs, especially, rely on automobiles to provide needed transportion. Experts state that car transportation in suburbs ""is a huge impediment"" (Source 1) when discussing ""efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes"" (Source 1). In the car-intensive areas of the United States, passenger cars hold responsibility for ""up to 50 percent"" (Source 1) of greenhouse emissions ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+44eb1367d416,2D73663127C2,"Elisabeth Rosenthal states that car usage reduction ""will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment"" (Source 4), especially in America ""since transportation is the second larget source [of emissions]"" (Source 4). Cutting down on cars for alternative, public, or group transportation provides a solution to the car epidemic of suburban America. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d927f34d87e7,2D73663127C2,"In other societies where limitations of car usage occured, the majority of its denizens replied positively. In the car-depleted suburb of Vauban, Germany, ""57 percent sold a car to move [to Vauban]"" (Source 1). The influential idea of a suburb without traffic jams and long drives to stores attracted 5,500 current residents of Vauban. Futhermore, car bans in Paris reduced emissions and cleansed the air ""after days of near-record pollution"" (Source 2) and ""five-days of intensifying smog"" (Source 2). During this ban, ""congestion was down 60 percent"" (Source 2), relieving traffic and pollution. In Bogota, Colombia, a ""car-free day"" (Source 3) promotes ""alternative transportation and reduce[s] smog"" (Source 3). One Colombian businessman commented cheerfuly, ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution."" (Source 3) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69047c25e105,2D73663127C2,"In America's evolving society, and the evolving global economy, limiting car usage stands benefically ",Position,Effective,,,
+52b8b7148158,2D73663127C2,"Reducing smog, eliminating the stress of traffic, and preserving the environment, low car-usage societies appeal in all current circumstances. Progressively, the world may see a day where car usage is antiquated. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b467285ea34,2D991610AC9C,"People With cars , dont actually use cars anymore they chose to give up on them because Mant have no place to park on the city outskirts and many sell their cars to live in vauban. others dont really own cars. people where more happy with walking . less auto use was labled as "" smart planning .""  the planned to make less car space and more space for walking in the city. stores are being placed in less s walk awayon a main street besides in malls thats far on a highway. they promote new citys that are less car dependent. so theres more walking.
+
+In Paris ,france they band cars bvecause of air pollution. citizens with odd and even numbered licenses plated had to pay a fine of $31 dollars as a fine for car pollution. citizens that disapproved of the fine had their cars impounded. the smog was rivaled form the most polluted city in the world Beijing , china. in france more cars where used on diesel. paris has more smog then others citys in europe. jobs that made deliverys complained because they couldnt deiliver packages to their recivers. they started to come up with cars thats doesnt run on gas ...that can be just charged with a plug-in. public transpotation was free from friday to monday.
+
+Colombia used a car-FREE day to avoid traffic jams. buses anf taxis were only allowed to be along the city that day. the day was promoting thr reduce of smog , people who disagreed always payed a fine of $25 dollars.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+753ee802aed3,2DA25C61D18D,"Have you ever found yourself being bored when doing a project? Have you found it pointless because you get the horrible feeling that you are not learning? It could be because it was designed by your teacher. Many schools, but not all, require students to complete summer projects in order to get them ready for the upcoming information in those upcoming classes. Many of those projects are teacher designed which various students tend to dislike because of the singular, required format. For example, many projects require students to only draw pictures, only write essays, or only build structures related to the certain topic. Many of these students tend to lack the motivation to complete those tasks because they feel uncomfortable doing an action they are inexperienced with. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5807c017331d,2DA25C61D18D,"Even though teacher designed summer projects tend to broaden the student's skills by giving them tasks they are somewhat uncomfortable with, it is better for projects to be student designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+72c501f7aff3,2DA25C61D18D,students can strengthen their confident skills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70286e41bd79,2DA25C61D18D,learn at their own pace ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1a60b54f65e,2DA25C61D18D,have fun while efficiently studying the topic ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7b5a09b7f4d,2DA25C61D18D,Student designed projects give students the choice to pick a format they feel comfortable with. This choice gives the student confidence in their ability to complete the project and strengthens a particular skill in use. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0317e2301905,2DA25C61D18D,"For example, Generic_Name, my niece, decided to do drawings for her summer reading project last year. She would say that drawing her own version of the characters from her favorite book,
+
+Diary of the Wimpy Kid , would helped her visualize the story in her own way so she could visualize effectively when reading books without pictures to guide her. When she completed her task, she felt so confident in her work and even said, ""I'm going to do so good on this project. I know my teacher is going to love it."" Because of this, it was noticeable that she obviously felt confident in her outstanding drawings. She even became a better drawer from it. She turned in her project and got an astounding grade on it. Overall, the experience she had with the project was very rewarding for her because she got a chance to showcase her confident drawings and had the productive opportunity to build on the skill she loved. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c039eb90e72,2DA25C61D18D,Student designed summer projects give students the ability to learn at their own pace while ultimately having fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a63e6373ab59,2DA25C61D18D,"For example, two years ago, my former World History teacher, Mr Generic_Name, had us do a project over the summer about the most important events in world history. Fortunately, he gave the opportunity to choose our own format for the project. Luckily for my friend Generic_Name, he decided to complete the project in the form of a song, considering he was very musically talented. Over the summer he would plan when to work on it that best fit his schedule so he wouldn't be stressed to finish the song. He researched about the effects of World War II and finished his song in no time. He stated that it was one of the best projects he had ever completed because for the first time, he felt like he actually learned something while doing an activity that he loved and had fun with. This clearly shows the effects of giving students a choice in designing their own projects for the best learning experience. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1fcea331e069,2DA25C61D18D,Some may argue that teacher designed summer projects give students a chance to broaden and strengthen skills students are uncomfortable with ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7e91171f931b,2DA25C61D18D,students don't learn that way. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+42674f692de8,2DA25C61D18D,"For example, this year in my AP Economics class, a peer of mine, Generic_Name, said she didn't understand the point of the summer project, which was to pick a book about economics, she chose the book
+
+Freakonmics , and write an essay on how economic concepts apply to everyday life. This is also considering that essay writing is not her specialty. She loudly complained about how boring the project was and how it was extremely time consuming. She even stated she got nothing out of it. Because she didn't have fun, she didn't learn anything and was furious by this outcome. This undoubtedly shows that teacher designed projects make students feel like they don't learn anything and overall, make them feel bitter about the subject. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7f660d5cc5b6,2DA25C61D18D,teacher designed projects don't give the students an efficient way of learning ,Claim,Effective,,,
+baeb2b8e39ef,2DA25C61D18D,"Some students may find the project uninteresting and because of this, they may not learn the helpful information needed to help them with their classes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1510f9a18bb0,2DA25C61D18D,"if teachers do include this option to student within the projects, it could give students the possibility of having fun and actually learning while they are strengthening skills they feel confident in. All teachers want is for their students to learn in an efficient manner in order to succeed, but that outcome won't be possible if teachers give out projects that don't include student decision making. If teachers want to achieve this outcome, they should give student different options to format their project in order for them to learn in the most efficient way so they can ultimately succeed academically and in the future. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ee924bd9c82b,2DABAC90201A,The Author support the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b19f95265fa5,2DABAC90201A,"Venus is actually a planet. in our system solar. Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus is the closest planet planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Venus is sometimes we are closer to
+
+Mars and others time to Venus. On the planet's surface, temperatures averange over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.
+
+Venus was probably covered largely with Oceans and could have supported varios forms of life just like earth, today Venus still has some features that are sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters, furthermore, recal that Venus can some times be our nearest option for aplanetary visit people like visit at planet Venus they want know about the planet. The scientists say tha planet is delete at de solar system because Venus is a little planet in solar system it was delate. approaches to studying Venus. for example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and lasted for trhee weeks in souch conditions. human curiosity know more about Venus the little planet in solar system. In planet Venus there not are life, people can live there at the planet Venus, Only in this planet are life. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+beecf575cb56,2DC33D804E4A,"The auther suggedts that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. I agree with the author, studying Venus could be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presests. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot, and the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. ""Venus, sometimes called the 'Evening Star', is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot""(Paragraph 1).""Often referred to as Earth's 'twin', Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distant""(Paragraph 2). However, I think studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8c9a2bd1af59,2DC33D804E4A,"I have couple reasons why I think studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+b9217e0ea012,2DC33D804E4A,"First of all, about 97 percent of a thick atmosphere blankets Venus are carbon dioxide. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ba5b82546709,2DC33D804E4A,"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is working on study about the planet, Venus. If NASA is possible to make spacecraft that could go to land on the surface of Venus, it will be difficult people research on the planet because 97 percent of the atmosphere are carbon dioxide. This condition makes different envionment from Earth.""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus""(Paragraph 3). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6282e1a10d50,2DC33D804E4A,"Secondly, the average temperatures of Venus is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cfe17ab70b92,2DC33D804E4A,"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit""(Paragraph 3). It is not possible that people stay on Venus on this very high temperature. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4ecb5ec82d0,2DC33D804E4A,"Finally, the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what they experience on Earth. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+26fd3c571ddc,2DC33D804E4A,"""the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet""(Paragraph 3). For example, if a person's weight is 70kg, the weight will chage t o 630kg on Venus. It is difficult to work on researching on enus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b995873f9927,2DC33D804E4A,"In addition, beyond high pressure and hean, Venusian geography and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e75a5a64f1a5,2DC33D804E4A,"""Beyond high pressure and hean, Venusian geography and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface""(Paragraph 3). 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2864d70f3768,2DC33D804E4A,"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density nd size, and occasionally the closest in distance. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74006c9e0669,2DC33D804E4A,"However, because of some reasons that I mensioned above, studing Venus could be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f72469065ca,2E0AF5C8526F,"The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. This new software has a promising applications for a variety of industries. ""Can we actually calculate emotions, like math homework?"" ""How can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?"" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5e05574af5bc,2E0AF5C8526F,"The process begins when the computer constructs a three-dimensional computer model of the face. All forty-four major muscles in the model must move like a human muscle. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit."" The facial expressions we use for each emotion is universal. The software can identify mixed emotions.
+
+The software is the latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. He then relies on his pyschologist Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of Facial Action Coding System. He has classified six basic emotions like happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.
+
+In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"", it tells us how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. ""Why would they want this? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bda57b1e98de,2E0AF5C8526F,"Some students could use this software on there computer to use for when they have no one to talk to, to use for homework like instead of looking it up on the internet they could say,""hey computer what is two plus two."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eee3782ec6f3,2E0AF5C8526F,"This could be the next siri, but on the computer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d68bf2cc5bc,2E0AF5C8526F,For students in a classroom to use this software could be valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3023e97fbb62,2E0AF5C8526F,"The article, the psychologists, and the professor tells us the good things about this software ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb3deb6dfa2e,2E0AF5C8526F,"The Facial Action Coding System, we can use it for anything. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+88bb634709d9,2E0AF5C8526F,You can also use it for anamonical information. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdae0ecbca05,2E0AF5C8526F,"The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Yes, we can actually calculate emotions, like math homework. The computer can recognize your emtions through software and through a special program Dr. Paul Eckman created. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d0a9f4f96177,2E4427B65439,"NASA. The United States form of a dominating space academy. The Viking 1, was in fact NASA's spacecraft that was launched in 2001. The spacecraft was set course for the small, red planet that is simillar to Earth. The planet is called Mars. Viking 1's ""sister"" Viking 2 was supposed to be landing on Mars, and that's why Viking 1 was sent up in space to begin with. While Viking 1 was snapping photos, its camera picked up a weird face-like structure on the surface of Mars. Some believe its a mysterious face that ""so called aliens"" built. I believe that their reasoning is just a bunch of garbage. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5e3df3ed4378,2E4427B65439,"What I think that is, is just a simple and natural landform made by the underground volcanoes, sandy surface, and rocks that landed there. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0af300ba5e4d,2E4427B65439,One reason I believe that this is a natural landform is from looking at the photos. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+67089f378a3e,2E4427B65439,"The ""face"" isn't any perticular shape that any man or alien would want. The landform would be shaped as a circle, square or any other simple shape, and it would not be so ridgid and cracked. If you were to look at the photo furthest to the left, you would assume that it resembled a face, but If you compair that photo to the one taken twenty-five years later, you would begin to understand that to photo was out-dated and that the camera was not as clear as the one taken later. In addition, why would an alien make a structure of a human's face. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bcf533f81a33,2E4427B65439,That part of the theory makes more sense if you take into consideration the angle the camera could have been taken at. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b3e743911ea6,2E4427B65439,Notice photo two? Its seems to be taken at an angle where there looks like there is a small mountain range looming over the rest of the area. This is key evidence explaining how this is just a natural landmark on Mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1db7eac42f10,2E4427B65439,"If you still do not believe me, then this next part will. If you think about it, why would NASA keep an amazing discover like this a secret? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c138b434c7a,2E4427B65439,"The answer is that they would not. If NASA went worldwide with their ""face"" they would make more money than millionaires or even other space academies. It does not make sense that the academy would keep an alien encounter hidden. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5717b9c6f374,2E4427B65439,"In conclusion, NASA is either brave or very stupid not to tell people about their ""face"", or people just want to get their word out to make other people critisized, make other people feel stupid, or they just want to feel like they are correct when they are clearly not. Therefore; This ""so called face"" is not a face, but it is just a land mark that was naturally constructed by the elements and not alien life-forms. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+217cafcd1a5f,2E4A8624CB67,I think that the author has a good point her beacuse it teaches the reading that Mars is not the only chicos with this we get to see that ther is other chicos that we can pick if one day we have to leave plant earth. Venus is a instreting plant because its sometimes cloeser to us then mars and it can help understand how to take care of earth. With this we get to see what we can change and what. We dont need to change about our plant Earth and what we do need to chance. Earth is a good plant but Venus is a plant that we dont fully understand as most plants Venus is a plant that is new to the human kind. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8403adc5b634,2E4A8624CB67,What Venus have that we dont which is good that the envioment can cush a submarin and the conditions. That it might not let a human leave in Venus is dangerous. But can be really helpful like if its amosphere is so strange can take some samples and can use it to help the earth be more protective. It can help us understand why its like and if one day and see if some one can live up there. Vensu us the hottest sureface temperture in our whole solors system which is perrt col if you ask me its hooter then the summer on the earth because its cloers to the sun. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ac008ff1309,2E4A8624CB67,`I think that us as human need to study Venus close and see waht it really is can see if it can help us understand our plant more and more. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+793bdde60307,2E4A8624CB67,We need to watch it closly to send people up there and see if tis right for humans. but yeah i think that Venus is a cool plant to study more cloly because its reaslly insterting to see how a differtn platn works everyday. We need to study it more so we cansee why its called the Evening Stare why its cloer to the sun why we need to talk about more to peepole so they may see how insterting is to study a plant like Venus.   ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc923591fd09,2E57A0350FFD,"Being a seagoing cowboy was much more than adventure, for me. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a02f0bf9fce1,2E57A0350FFD,"I love being able to go out on the sea and have fun will helpping people with there problems make me super happy and I wouldn't have this job if my friend didn't tell me about it. For example (the world war11) I got to go to many places like China, Europe, and Italy.
+
+I was happy to help all this people with there problems and when we got to go on a ship, we had the opportunity to take turns to watch over the animals at night to feed them and to make sure that nothing bad is happening like fighting our the bottom of the ship is being filled up with water.
+
+So I signed up to watch them and so I got the job. I had to stay up super late to watch them and to I went to tell the captin that every thing was okay and so on my way I slipped on some water and I fell.
+
+I had almost fell overboared but I didn't, thanks to a peice of meatel on the side of the boat and i was happy that I didnt die. I am thankful that I am still alive after breaking my ribs, and slidding down a latter. I soon recovered and was back to the job and so we took all the animals back to were they were.
+
+So we made a game place were they were. We played a whole bunch of games and we did are ruiten, until we had another jod were we had to go get animals and watch over them. I am thankful to be able to do this job with people who care about me and support me well this job.
+
+I wonder what are next job will be? Will I break another bone in my body? Can I survie another animal watch? Will I survie breaking another bone in my body? I don't know if i can survie another bone in my boby that can be broken?
+
+After about a month we get a call to go get some animals and so we went to go get them and I have to say it was a long ride to go to Teaxs and it was close to were my uncle lived and so we got there and there was a huge sand storm and so we had to go get alll the horses, and take them to the sea and then I relized that my uncle had this one horse and it did not like me at all. As we were getting the horses around I seen that horse. The captin asked me if I wanted to watch the animals that week and I said "", Yes I will'. So I was up all night watching all the horses and so I had to feed them. I was feed the one horse that hated me the most and it kicked me right in the neck as I was feeding him. I was out for a really long time and my best friend came down there and found me on the floor ""sleeping"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+308ac4c43328,2E67DBD40D46,"The author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present."" ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+c1000d329ad1,2E67DBD40D46,"vening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an anmateur stargazer to spot"". this quote is telling us that the eveing star is really bright and its the most beautyfull star of all stars in the sky.
+
+""often referred to as earths twin venus is the closest plant to Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too"". this quote is showing us the closest planets to the Earth. venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar sysrem, even though mercury is closer to our sun. The national aeronautice and space administration NASA has one particularry compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA possible solution to the hodtile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. imagine a blimp like vehile hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusain landscape. At 30 plus miles above the surface temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radition would not exceed earth levels not easy condition but survivable. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0b5b8f4d166f,2E67DBD40D46,in conclution this story is all about eart and the venus .                                             ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b597b8c17913,2E7245D9A04D,The technology that they are starting to use to see people different emotion can help lots of people out when they think they don't have emotions. The software would be great for people when what to know the percents of there emotion and what they show every day. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+03fe06734eab,2E7245D9A04D,Computers show be allowed to read the emotions of the student in from of them so that maybe the computer can help. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7d61cf32bdbc,2E7245D9A04D,An example of why they should be allowed is because the computer just doesnt scan just a few it scans all 44 muscles in your face. It allows the computer to maybe bring something up to you to realise that maybe this is something that i need to look into for maybe fun or help. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb6573b991df,2E7245D9A04D,Its helps the students outs when they are trying to figure out what they can do to help with each emotion you have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8763f501ae9a,2E7245D9A04D,Another reason why computer show be allowed to scan emotions is because the software can identify mix emotion. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24c032875d34,2E7245D9A04D,"Its said by Dr. Huang,"" The facial expression for each emotion is universal even though individual often show vary degree of expression."" The software uses video imagery, the emtion-recognition software track there facial movement in a real face or a painted face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1ba3641767e8,2E7245D9A04D,Therefore computer should be used to scan students emotions just so maybe is its really bad the school can do something for that student and get them the help they need. This would be alot helpful if computer could help or tell the school whats students emotions actaul are and what the percents is.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e269a8844a0,2E810318FBD2,"I do agree that student's should at least do one activity like help work on the year book's, sports,student council, etc. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+600076807ce3,2E810318FBD2,If i had to pick one activity it would be student council because i can help people like if their going through tough times. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4077b2c71d1,2E810318FBD2,"Say if they have trouble in school, try to help them with there grade's, or maybe the lost a love one. I would convince other to support me because i listen to people about what wrong or if there going thought something. I care about people feelings and i won't say anything in till there done.
+
+Why do i want to do this is because say if your mom,dad,granddad, or grandma die in a car crush wouldn you be upset because that's your family member or maybe they die of the corona would you be upset you would want a councilor, brother, or sister. What i'm trying to say is that people need a council to help them out. Ok say that a truck smash your house wouldn't you be in shock in that case you would need a council right.
+
+What i trying to say is that i want people to support me to do what i want to do, like say i want to help people out through family problem or like a love one die of cancer, heart attack, car crush, etc. I would be there to help them through there problem. it would be my honor to help people out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8681f92b2445,2E810318FBD2,Your principal has decided that all student's must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. I would do anything to help out people in need for what ever they want me to here i will be there for there need or whats i will be there in spirit. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4179a2eac819,2E86ACD1A766,You should participate in the Seagoing cowboys ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d80c01b68a34,2E86ACD1A766,could visit alot of cool places. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21232c6dc9bc,2E86ACD1A766,"you could go anywhere you wanted to. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f36a30a149dd,2E86ACD1A766,"Its also good if you like to help people.
+
+If you love helping people then you should participate in this program. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e90f64330240,2E86ACD1A766,"another thing thats good about this program is that you can do it with a friend.
+
+If you like to hangout with your friend alot then you should participate in this program. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6fe5f8cb857f,2E86ACD1A766,Another thing great about the Seagoing cowboys is that if you like helping animals you should do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+069bc188ec75,2E86ACD1A766,"You get to take care of and look after all the animals on the boat. feeding and looking after animals is a great to do with a friend.
+
+even if you dont like animals. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a19201eac60,2E86ACD1A766,The seagoing cowboys program is an unbelivible opportunity for somebody to go across the ocean and see places people dont get to see everyday. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16ef57c275f3,2E86ACD1A766,"I had been to europe,china greece and have even crossed the ocean 16 times!
+
+The favorite place ive been to was venice,Italy,a city with streets of water.
+
+Theres also so many places you can go.
+
+Ive been to China,Greece,Europe,Venice,italy and even crete.
+
+There I toured an excavated castle.
+
+This program is the perfect opportunity to visit any place you want to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7c92a53c89b,2E86ACD1A766,"There are some flaws to this program.
+
+Its very dangerous. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ffcd396b7344,2E86ACD1A766,"I almost slid off the boat in the middle of the night.
+
+your also going to be in the ocean for hours until you reach your destination. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b04c6754ae52,2E86ACD1A766,But all in the end its a really good program. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a10f88fac282,2EEB19BB460B,I am for the value of this technollogy to read students emotional expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+22edd8b80157,2EEB19BB460B,"To start off with I think this would be a. good idea because it says in the article ""for instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling by just simply by the look on there face."" This proves you can probably tell how one of your friends are feeling by just a expression on there face but my point is this that the technollogy can tell what emotions youtr friend is actually feeling ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa35293474a5,2EEB19BB460B,This would be helpful because sometimes you ask a friend what is wrong and they just say nothing but you know something is wrong by the way they are acting and this technollogy will help with that because and can tell what emotions they re actuallyu feeling ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f767382c86c,2EEB19BB460B,"In addition, this technoollogy would also be a positive because you can know when anyone is happy,sad or frustrated ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d08c346a1376,2EEB19BB460B,"For example it says in the article ""imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad. For exampe, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow, but if yyou frown, the next ad will be different.'' This shows that you can tell how someone is feeling just based on if they smile or frown. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3faa93ab4fd9,2EEB19BB460B,Personally I am against this because I would love to know what everyone is feeling if they asre my frien oir not and know the real reason why they are acting the way they are no matter if they are sad or happy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea2257b93733,2EEB19BB460B,"In conclusion, I am for this technollogy to read students emotinoal feelings because i would like to know how everyone is feeling and acting the way they are. For instance, what if it is a friendand no matter how close you are they will not t ell you if they are upset or happy and if you had this technollogy you could tell what they are feeling because they could lie and say they are not feeling anything which then this technollogy could then help with that.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+278852ffb5f6,2EEE167F8C62,"According to defenders of NASA if their was an ancint civilization on Mars NASA would benifit from it financialy. "" NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars."" Also there is no evidence or traces of a Ancient civilization on Mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6974e1787d7b,2EEE167F8C62,Also NASA has no reason to try to cover up any civilization that we may not know about because they will be benifiting from that with more tax money from the government ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b233aa20a9b6,2EEE167F8C62,The reasons why NASA would not want to cover or hide an ancient civilization on Mars up is because they would clearly benifit from the sitiuation. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+028881b24a17,2EEE167F8C62,"Defenders of the
+
+NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars."" Also part of the reason they even made this picture avalible to the public is to bring attention to mars. "" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars."" If they wanted to cover this ""Face"" on Mars up there would have never been a photo releasead to the public so every one can look at and study. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d4774cc301c2,2EEE167F8C62,After all of that information about NASA and how they would benifit from a ancint civilization on. Mars there is no absalutly no reason NASA would cover this up if they were going to benifit from the possibility of an. Ancient civilization on a planet that does not even have life today. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1083acf77818,2F4428039BA4,If you join the program you can see alot of stuff that not that many people get to see at all ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e991c571c03,2F4428039BA4,"the text states,""Luke also toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+937ce5e781a1,2F4428039BA4,if you do you get to help people and help animals. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8e6fb28677f,2F4428039BA4,It is cool because you go around at sea alot. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1290888ae783,2F4428039BA4,you get to do fun stuff to like play games and outdoor activites. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cdc2c6c339b,2F4428039BA4,most of the time if oyu are not careful and don't look oyu could get hurt and the fall off the ship ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ed07a2e4aea1,2F4428039BA4,you go to alot of cities and countries. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b029048f939c,2F4428039BA4,oyu have to be ready though cause if you are not you might not know what is going on for every body. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+67fb20389983,2F4428039BA4,that is why you should go and do that program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fff2be4a7b75,2F4428039BA4,it is really fun and you do alot of cool stuff and do alot of cool stuff so you should do it and go around the world and have fun doning it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+92443f98cdac,2F523DD862F0,"Cars are a very good tool for getting from one location to the next, but the gas and diesel that powers some cars is producing a greenhouse gas that is polluting our air. A few countries have temporarily banned the usage of cars because of the thick smog that has built around their air space. In Source 1, by
+
+Elizabeth Rosenthal , Source 2, by
+
+Robert Duffer,
+
+Source 3, by
+
+Andrew Selsky , and lastly source 4, by
+
+Elizabeth Rosenthal , speak about how cars are effecting our lives, and polluting our air ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2a25184b1948,2F523DD862F0,"The advantages of limiting car usage would help decrease, or even eliminate greenhouse gases. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e4b8ac60b449,2F523DD862F0,"By temporarily banning the usage of cars, Paris, France succesfully decreased the thick smog that had built around their city. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07e73cc8eec2,2F523DD862F0,"According to source 2, by
+
+Robert Duffer , ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates where ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day."" Because of this sucessful temporary ban from Paris, by Monday the smog cleared enough for the ruling French party to rescide the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday, according to
+
+Robert Duffer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b1822065559,2F523DD862F0,"In Bogota, Colombia, home to 7 million, has a ""program thats set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city errily devioid of traffic jams."" According to source 3, by
+
+Andrew Selsky.
+
+It has been three straight years that cars have been banned with only busses and taxis permitted ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3dcbedbd096,2F523DD862F0,"the
+
+Day Without Cars , the goal of this program is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c7f3a6b3b60,2F523DD862F0,"In some places, such as Vauban, Germany, have given up their cars ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8730635cb05,2F523DD862F0,"""Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg, near the French and Swiss boarders. The streets of this upscale community are completely
+
+""Car Free""
+
+- except for the main thoroughfare, and a few streets on one edge of the community. Car ownership is allowed, but there is only two places to park- large garages at the edge of the development, where a car owner buys a space, for $40,000 along with a home. 70% of Vauban's families don't own cars, and 57% sold their car to move there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dee1cf4e261e,2F523DD862F0,"All around the world there is appearently issues with air pollution because of the cars that residents of those places own. There are many programs in place, such as the temporary ban of cars in Paris, France, and the
+
+Day Without Cars in Bogota, Colombia. The efforts of these programs have not gone to waste, because there has been a significant decrease in smog and air pollution in these places. Hopefully in the future there will be many more programs like these to lower air pollution and save our Earth.            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+26e024cd7249,2F5B4EFC880B,"There are many reasons why people would think that the face was created by aliens. There are also many reasons why people would think it is a natural landform. Either way, do we really know what it is? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c6309d7f04b2,2F5B4EFC880B,The face is a very mysterious thing ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+599fd5456e4e,2F5B4EFC880B,It's not every day you see something resemble a face on a planet. There are many people out there that believe it is just a natural landform. People think that because there are many landforms on Earth that resemble a face so why think that aliens did it just because it is on another planet. Also they might not belive in aliens. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+780b4c380147,2F5B4EFC880B,There are also people who think aliens created it. They think this because it really isn't an everyday think to see a landform that resembles a face. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f78d923bc44e,2F5B4EFC880B,So they start to think what could have created that. Since it is on Mars they instantly think aliens. They think aliens because they can't think of what else could cause that and they think aliens can do crazy things like shape the land. Also people read things from newspaper articles that talk about it and watch movies about aliens and see them do crazy things like shape the land and other crazy things. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f87cd5fb439,2F5B4EFC880B,People who think the face is just a natural landform probably think the people that believe aliens made it are crazy. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ecde530a221c,2F5B4EFC880B,"They might think they are crazy because there is no proof that aliens exist, so why think that something that might not exist create something like a face in a planet. It makes more sense that it is a natural landform that just so happens to resemble a face. Not many scientists believed it was an alien artifact so many people would think that is a natural landform because scientists don't believe it is something aliens created. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5971a914d41e,2F5B4EFC880B,"On April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his ""Mars Orbiter Camera"" took a picture of the face. The picture was ten times sharper than the original and it proved that it was just a natural landform. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7fb40a9506b1,2F5B4EFC880B,People who believed aliens created it were unsatisfied because the way Mars faced in 98' it was winter time. So it was very cloudy. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e9aa24b2441c,2F5B4EFC880B,"But on April 8, 2001 he set out for another picture. They took an extrodinary picture. Again it proved it was just a landform. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+40cedec69302,2F5B4EFC880B,"So therefore the people who thought it was just a landform were correct. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1eddeaabeec,2F5B4EFC880B,people had many reasons to believe what they believed. Michael Malin had to find out the answer and find out what exaclty made it. That's exaclty what he did. He found out it was just a landform that resembled a face. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6821ef428800,2F5B4EFC880B,But does that mean that the people who believe aliens created it believe that it is just a landorm because of a picture? Maybe not but almost everyone believes/knows it is a landform because of the picture and observations.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+276f97874898,2FF49615D63E,"Summer assignments are widely used throughout the world today. Most educators don't require upcoming students to complete summer assignments, but rather those who are enrolled in high-level courses. The time given off from school is a time for students to relax and recollect themselves from the previous year, but that doesn't mean work should stop too. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+08396c40ebf4,2FF49615D63E,Summer assignments should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f00a38986848,2FF49615D63E,educators understand what is to be expected from their students within the next school year and can help them prepare ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1b8a4d5ce304,2FF49615D63E,it will keep students' brains actively working ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e23762d1cabd,2FF49615D63E,teacher-designed assignments will create an equal learning style between students and those from previous years. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+986979e6b4f2,2FF49615D63E,"High schoolers are very busy people who rather not spend a portion of their summer completing school work. With the help of their teachers, having the teacher-designed summer assignment, students will have the motivation to work and complete what is being asked of them. Going into a new school year, students could never imagine what may occur or what teacher they may get. It could be an easier course but with a difficult teacher, or a challenging course with a relaxed teacher. Having these teacher-designed assignments, will provide knowledge to the students that they may need for the upcoming class. It will give them a peek as to what they may expect while enrolled. This is important because most students base their course selections off of what their friends are taking, rather than what they are more interested in. These students may have no idea what the course is about, so it's beneficial to have the teachers create the necessary work. Saying this, with the expectations held by teachers, it's only fair for students to be prepared. Assigning this type of work, will help take a leading hand in the successes waiting for these curios students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40df038402c6,2FF49615D63E,"With the idea of no school, beaches, and long nights, students won't be focusing on work. Students then tend to lack academically because their brain hasn't been tested for quite some time. Brain activity never stops, even when sleeping, but it does forget how to preform in certain circumstances. Luckily, teachers understand that this happens because even teachers go through this mindset. They don't give these assignment because they feel like it, but because they know who teenagers are. If students begin to expect no work during breaks, this will continue to occur ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fde6032ce3cf,2FF49615D63E,"Teacher-designed summer assignments will continue to test the ability within each student, while keeping their brains on track ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0efb90c37081,2FF49615D63E,"In comparison, students will be given the same amount of work when assigned these projects. No one student will have to do more than the other, unless given a choice ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ed1cc89d0c0c,2FF49615D63E,"Student-designed projects may bring conflict to some who feel that they're doing more than another. This will only cause more stress on teachers and students who rather spend their time worrying about their own work. Students who may have had an older sibling in the same class tell them what to expect and then them receiving something completely different angers students. Students stick to the idea that everyone should get what others get, nothing different. If they receive something opposing their original belief, they will bring it to the teacher's attention almost immediately. The importance of teacher-designed projects is to inform the student not cause arguments. In addition, it will also limit the amount of work teachers have to put in. Teachers can then focus on what the main idea of the project is and assess each student based off of that. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+73843633f9cc,2FF49615D63E,"Summer assignments should not be seen as a waste of time, but something that helps the individual continue to educate, prepare, and reflect on their own learning. As a teenager in high school, the addition resources assigned are drastically helpful. They limit worry, stress, and over all forgetfulness. This is all given when the project is teacher-designed because it ensures that what is being done is beneficial for the upcoming year. Teachers keep in mind that it's not what one does with the work provided but what they make of it. The projects teachers create, test the capabilities of the individual and their ability to apply this knowledge. All in which is important for a successful student. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9736c8de8e00,2FF6C7542D18,"As students grow older, they will be assigned an appropriate amount of responsibilities, such as schoolwork and projects; even some that are meant to be completed by the first day of school. Summer project can be intimidating to some students, however, summer projects are only meant to benefit the students. The benefits of summer projects include: the continuation of study and time management skills, as well as reading and writing. There is a simple solution that could be put in effect by the school officials and administration; allowing students to design their own projects based off a topic that peaks their interest. Allowing students to design their own projects will significantly increase the interest level and positive feedback that will be the deciding factor in whether or not the project is assigned the next year. The interest level and feedback received will be based off of the following: if students are given the opportunity to conduct research that they find intriguing, not what their teacher finds intriguing; their final project will be significantly better than if the project was teacher-designed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3c57ee2d6ec6,2FF6C7542D18,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f227462b539,2FF6C7542D18,allow students to focus on a topic that they are passionate about ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c15754df3a8f,2FF6C7542D18,allow students to continue learning important skills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9901c5fccbc4,2FF6C7542D18,allow students to share a topic that they find interesting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+79a231f380cb,2FF6C7542D18,"Discovering passions may be difficult at a young age, however, if students are given the opportunity to focus on a topic that they find passion in, it will create a well-done project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e88fc5a56c44,2FF6C7542D18,"Passions could include: athletics, academics, or an extra curricular; such as music, band, or the arts. A student-designed project will let students study a topic that they are interested in. If students are interested in what they are studying or researching, then there is a increased chance of students truly enjoying the project. As mentioned about, a student-designed project will allow for a quality project. The more say students have regarding their schoolwork, the better the outcome of that work. Personally, when given the chance to chose the topic or project guideline, there is a much better result than when given a strict outline. Typically, summer projects appear to be a burden for some students, however, students will not see a project about their passions as a concern. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a6a5e5f417e7,2FF6C7542D18,"Study skills, such as spacing out workdays and time management, are skills that students will continue to use as they further their education. Scheduling workdays is a simple way to reduce stress, and a way for students to not feel overwhelmed. Time management goes along with spacing out workdays because it will prevent students from cramming in the project the night before it is due. If students leave the project until the last minute, the result will not be pleasing and it would be a waste of an opportunity for students to find one of their true passions. Students will also be given the opportunity to learn the proper way to research their topic. This is yet another skill that students will use as they continue their education. Learning how to start researching and then learning what can be cut out is a challenging process that students can learn through the process of trial and error. Students will be able to take the research from various reliable resources, and develop their project, while learning an additional skill: project design. Designing a project so it is appealing to most and finding what is most convenient for you is important because it will allow future projects to be completed in an effective and efficient manner. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7211218baca2,2FF6C7542D18,"allow students to get to know each other, work on public speaking and presentation skills, and will show students topics of interest. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+548b37b5f1d3,2FF6C7542D18,"Projects that are controlled by the student will allow icebreaker activities to run smoothly. Icebreaker activities are typically included in the first day of school, and they allow students to get to know each other and their teacher. If every student came prepared to share their presentation, they they would not only learn something about their fellow classmates, but they would also get the chance to work on their public speaking and presentation skills. Public speaking may be one of the most relevant and commonly used skills as you enter higher education and the workforce, as it is something that is hard to avoid. The more it is practiced, the more comfortable people, in this case, student will get with it. Students can also use this project as a starting to point to see where they might what to take their future. Deciding classes for the next school year, or even thinking about a college major can be difficult and intimidating. However, if students know their passions and interests, then the process will seem significantly less worrisome. A way to reduce the stress on making decision such as classes or college, is to let students discover their interests through student-designed projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d315371dbf48,2FF6C7542D18,"If summer projects are fully designed by students, then students will be able to focus on their passions, improve their study skills, and share a topic that they find interesting. Revealing the topics that students find passion in will lead to a quality projects, a head start in determining courses and majors, and will serve as a way to learn necessary skills for college and the workforce. The more opportunities students are given to decide what they want to study or complete a project about will allow students to find those passions, such as sports, a specific class, or a certain type of art or drama. Student-designed project will also let students learn the skills that are most useful for them, for instance: time management or public speaking. Most importantly, students will be able to discover who they truly are through a project that they design.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a4f77a0107b5,2FF9836001F4,People say not everyone can do what some people can do. A person can be good at something while someone else is terrible at it. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+19617f23c0dc,2FF9836001F4,"I disagree with this decision because you go to school to learn about what you need to know for the future. You don't go to school to learn about sports, or learn how to make yearbooks. You don't go to school to get pushed by someone about something you don't want to do. You should be able to have your own choice. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b32c74bf2b5b,2FF9836001F4,"For instance, I play basketball for my school. I had my own choice of if I wanted to tryout for basketball or not. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c43f7051809,2FF9836001F4,Not everyone likes playing basketball like me. I like basketball because when im on or off the court it makes me think about the game not about life or whats happening on the bleachers. I try my best at practice so I can maybe start in a game. You got to work hard for something you want. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff8865b76a53,2FF9836001F4,Another example is when I get older I want to be a cosmataligist. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fffbe5640149,2FF9836001F4,"Some people may want to be one also. Others might think the opposite. When I was a kid I use to play with doll's hair and watch YouTube videos on how to die hair, cut hair, and also brush hair the right way. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bbb76d490527,2FF9836001F4,I was trying to explain that not everyone is the same. You might have the same talent as someone or you may not and thats okay if not. You might want to be the same thing as someone when you get older but someone may want to be the opposite. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f92192b2fdfb,3005ADCF9F86,"How i feel about this article talking about having a piece of technology that could show and tell you what people are feeling is pretty crazy. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+123cfa2f93b1,3005ADCF9F86,Ok with starting this off i would say that i am against this ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2ff97209e420,3005ADCF9F86,because yeah it would be cool to see peoples emotions and see how people are feeling ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+56d9233b802d,3005ADCF9F86,but i think it is bad because teachers for example would use it whenever and espically when a student is mad or acting strange or if the teacher and student got in an argument. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5fa6bbac41b2,3005ADCF9F86,The teacher would use it to see how they where feeling and with one other thing if a student is texting under his lap or something is smiling or showing some type of motion a teacher could have the machine read what they are feeling about during that time to even hundred percent know kids where on there phones that could be a good thing for teachers but bad for students and that would make students even more mad or anything towards school or teachers ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3889392c19c,3005ADCF9F86,i think something to let you see emotion would be bad to have in school because you don't need to no how people are feeling its not your buisness to know. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3711b3fd11f7,3005ADCF9F86,And to sum this all up in my conclusion to the essay of the article is that it would be cool to see something like that but not in school and they should have it set up in places where people could go in public. And try not in schools or places that need it like hospitals or places for crazy people just not school the end. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+74219131ec8f,3034D1B95D44,The reson you should join this organization ,Position,Adequate,,,
+330cf056998c,3034D1B95D44,it has so many opportunitys that open up for you and your family. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+393910cf22ee,3034D1B95D44,"For example you would get to meet new people everyday you would get to see new things all the time. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe90eaf73747,3034D1B95D44,Especially if you don't like working long hours at work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d831663e61be,3034D1B95D44,"because if you are Seagoing Cowboy you only have to work a couple hours a day. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fb596d3dcb86,3034D1B95D44,You should especially join if you like to see ancient artifacts such as an old castle is Crete and even the Panama Canal. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1ce7f4171f6f,3034D1B95D44,The down sides of being a Seagoing Cowboy is that you will have to travel far from home and stay away from your family for long periods of time and you wouldn't get to see them much. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1ab316db5083,3034D1B95D44,"Those are some resons that you should join the organization because like I said it would be such an opportunity for you and your family. Make sure you join if you would like to see cool things, meet unique people, and just have fun, but if you don't like staying away from home you shouldn't join because you will have to stay for long periods of time.
+
+There are also some reasons that you would not want to join. Just remember all of these things could change your life for eve ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e10c68ef9f8f,305F26C237E3,I am all for this new technology to read peoples emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dfb0070414d0,305F26C237E3,If we could read their emotions it would be easier to help people to get better if they are in a bad place in life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4c16face773,305F26C237E3,It would help so many people that are depressed and need help but afrad ask for it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0365a7a1d374,305F26C237E3,when people get help with their emotions they become more stable then they were before. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bd3eb76ca6b,305F26C237E3,"Im all for the values of using this new emotion technology because you tell if people are faking a smile. You can tell because when you fake it you dont use the same muscles as when you really smile. When you fake smile the muscles you use are zygomatic major that make your mouth stretche sideways and the risori. But when you really smile you use the muscles called zygomatic major that begin at your cheek bones and life the corners of your mouth. The other muscle you use is called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus which makes crow's-feet around your eyes. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+681e1279043f,305F26C237E3,This is way i think we should use this technology in the futer. It could help with so many things. People could get the help they need. Life would just be so much better if we all could understand each other. This will be one of the best things you can do for someone needs and wants help to make their life and friends and familys lifes better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+df85708f1617,3085F5ECF4B0,The author claims that no matter the dangers that venus should still be explored. i agree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89ec34b7e602,3085F5ECF4B0,becuse it is a neighoring planet as well as earths twin and could have been inhabitable a very llong time ago meaning lifeforms could have been living their or still live on venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+301787e295ad,3085F5ECF4B0,venus is high radiated and very hot their atmospheric pressure is high. The thought of any person wanting to go their is dispicable because of such harsh conditions. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d8a83924ad7d,3085F5ECF4B0,But the author does think that venus should be explored dispite the conditions ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aacaacae27ce,3085F5ECF4B0,doing so will take alot of tech we dont have yet ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+55870a027137,3085F5ECF4B0,but mechanical mechines can be used be cause they are not electrical like computers or smartphones ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b28a6a77fee6,3085F5ECF4B0,NASA feels that the best way to explore venus is to hover over it but in order to actually explore said planet you must get close and collect samples thhis will provide evidence for what was missed in the earlier times we tried to explore venus ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+429d4c695e01,3085F5ECF4B0,Along with it being our neighboring planet is has alot of similarities such as size and shape ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bcb62adda343,3085F5ECF4B0,But also differences such as the planet being almost 800 degrees fahrenheit. The presure could be so strong it can crush submarines that are able to go to the deepest parts of the ocean could be liquefyed ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a0431d368be,3085F5ECF4B0,venus a very intresting planet to explore so maybe one day we will be able to visit tis place and search for samples and look for unkown elements. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8eba4eae861,3085F5ECF4B0,It is sutable to assume that NASA will still try to explore venus. And figure if their is a way to explore it and venture to et samples and find eelements and reduce the dangers in venus. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b19122f905d3,30A900519B84,The Facial Action coding system enable computers to identify humans emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d9b40821a9e,30A900519B84,"Dr. Huang relies the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS, Eckman has classified about six basic emotions which are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and even sadness after that he even then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles in which for example, are frontalis pars laterlis muscle (above your eyes) in the raises of are eyebrows when we are surprised; are orbicularis oris (around are mouth) tighten are lips to show anger. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fb6907b996c,30A900519B84,"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to are face, while in the computer it shows it in how much it can do ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b6e3a4bcf641,30A900519B84,"In the computer imagine know when we are happy or even sad for example, if we smile when a Wed ad appears on are screen, a similar ad might follow. But if we frown, the next ad will be different.
+
+When we are looking in the mirror:
+
+* raise your lips at the corner of your mouth,
+
+* when you squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling at the corner of your eyes,
+
+* when you hold it, rise the outer pars of your cheek up, toward your eyes,
+
+In fact, these are instructionws for a face that looks happy.
+
+In a real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at yourt cheek bones) lifts the corner of you mouth. (that's out instruction #1.)
+
+Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sidways using the zygomstic major and a different muscle, the risorius. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f7f1d0bddb1,30A900519B84,"Theoty of Emotion, Moving are facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea2e9a0a52f9,30A900519B84,"in what you are feeling that day and how you felt last night, you show emotion at school, work, even at your own house. Emotion are express in how your day was, your emotions is like a tv show in how but act you fell what they feel if they are happy, mad, sad, or even scard.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a94635ba557,312C1164A2D4,"Technology all around us is evolving, we're now to the point where we can tell how exactly Mona Lisa was feeling when her famous picture was painted. Due to new technology such as, the Facial Action Coding System, professionals can tell exactly how someone is feeling in a picture, or even in class during a lesson. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+424be938a101,312C1164A2D4,This new application will have a massive impact on how teachers educate kids. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1c08f477efd8,312C1164A2D4,This will help out teachers with how to teach a lesson ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd9da2daa8a5,312C1164A2D4,improve how engaged kids will be in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+957abe7311c7,312C1164A2D4,"First, classroom computers could use this program to recongnize when a student is confused or bored. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+22400585ff71,312C1164A2D4,The computer would then modify the lesson so the student will hopefully become interested again. This program could really get kids to learn and become interested about what is being taught. This would ultimately lead to higher passing rates and better futures for kids. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0bb0eaed1a9,312C1164A2D4,"Secondly, this technology can make video games or video surgery alot more expressive. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cf5941af289f,312C1164A2D4,"Some faces in videos are really bland and boring. If the faces were better detailed and more expressive the viewer will be interested and will pay more attention. Expressions on animated faces are really important, these features draw the viewers attention and will interest them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7abc764c1f2e,312C1164A2D4,"All in all, this new technology is very valuable in a classroom. It would durrastically change how kids learn and would make them way more interested than they currently are. Most kids do not learn the same, this technology could change that so each student can learn the way that best helps them. This application will help out teachers tremendously and could really improve passing rates! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1ff7245ccb8f,313229323B6E,"""The day that mankind realizes that their creations destroy the true beauty of mother nature it will be too late."" This quote by one of our nations greatest political and environmental activists, Irvin Green, directly applies to the topic of reducing pollution. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+08f43f5d7083,313229323B6E,"One simple, yet extremly effective way to reduce pollution is limiting the transportation methods we travel by. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7972b1493721,313229323B6E,"Limiting car and vehicle usage can reduce pollution, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d228a0aaa4d4,313229323B6E,"nearly eliminate accidents, and makes the road a safer place. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ab4347877ace,313229323B6E,"In the article, ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", it is stated that in Vauban Germany, 70 percent of families do not own vehicles. The other 30% that do, do not have a place to park them, making them basically useless. Residents in Vauban have stopped their need for transportation, making malls and stores a walk away. In this new approach, pollution has drastically reduced in numbers and has made it a much safer and cleaner place to live. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c0c843c04ab,313229323B6E,"The usage of vehicles are a double-edged sword. They may get us to where we need to go with plenty of time to spare, but what are we really loosing because of it? What we are loosing is the environment and also our health. In Paris, the pollution rate almost reached a new record high, thus forcing the partial driving pan to clear the air of the global city. In the article, ""Paris bans driving due to smog"", its evident that cars hurt us in more ways then we realize. Buisnesses are suffering due to the lack of transportaion avaliable to delivery their services as seen in source number two, ""Delivery companies complained of lost revenue"". ""Congestion was down 60% in the capital of france after five-days of intesifying smog..."" The smog was so dense that Paris officials created a law making even-numbered license plates to leave there cars at home to reduce pollution. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1d994b60ac5,313229323B6E,"Despite the benefits that come along with transportation, there are more disadvanges then advantages. Pollution is the second largest source of America's emissions just behind power plants. Many sociologist have seen these statistics and have also noticed that American transportation usuage has slowly been declining since its peak in 2005. People are slowly but surely helping the cause in their own ways, whether its by delaying getting there license, limit there driving, or even car-pooling with friends. Limiting car and vehicle usage can reduce pollution, nearly eliminate accidents, and makes the road a safer place to be. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b912f26c6c56,317C1C9BCDA0,"Most people you know probably participate in some form of an extracurricular activity. Whether it be sports, a school club, theatre, or something else, almost all of us have participated in an extracurricular at some point in our lives. Extracurricular activities have many benefits, such as an opportunity to do something you enjoy, which will make you happier and help you relieve stress, and an opportunity to meet new people who share your interests. However, some people may argue that extracurricular activities take away time that they don't have, but there's a solution for that. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ba114284d972,317C1C9BCDA0,I agree with the principle's decision to have everyone participate in an extracurricular activity because there are many benefits that come from participating in them. ,Position,Effective,,,
+acef3a6cd4e0,317C1C9BCDA0,Extracurricular activities are a great way to do something you enjoy. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f5811496b3c2,317C1C9BCDA0,"There are many different things to do which means that there is something for everyone. Having the opportunity to be participating in something you enjoy will make you happier. It has been proven that when you're happier, you have lower stress levels. When asked, 9 out of 10 students said that they felt stressed by school often. An extracurricular activity is a great way to relieve some of that stress. By participating in something you enjoy and something you chose to do, you'll be able to improve your skills, which can give you a sense of accomplishment and happiness. These are just some of the benefits of an extracurricular activity. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+54ab425f034a,317C1C9BCDA0,Extracurricular activities are also a great way to meet new people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+194427ddcb23,317C1C9BCDA0,"There are people that come from all different backgrounds, that you may not have classes with at school, that may be in different grades, or that you may have never known without participating in an extracurricular activity. These new people will share the same interests as you which is a great way to be able to do things together and it gives you an opportunity to be able to learn from each other. By being in an extracurricular activity where you get to meet these new people, you'll have an opportunity to hang out with them on a regular basis when you may not have been able to do that any other time. These are just some of the other many benefits that an extracurricular activity can bring. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f01cd71bfd6f,317C1C9BCDA0,There are some people who may argue against everyone having to participate in an extracurricular activity. They may say that they don't have the time to participate and if they do then they won't get their school work done. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+57676098bc2f,317C1C9BCDA0,"However, other people who participate in extracurricular activities get their work done on time which means that there are ways to do so. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fd846b606185,317C1C9BCDA0,"You also won't have that activity every single day which means that it won't inflict on your everyday life. If you're worried about not having time to get work done, you can focus really hard during your study hall period to get more work done, you can get up earlier in the mornings to get extra work done, and you can even do work on your way to or from the activity, or to and from school in the mornings and afternoons. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a302d8c9c7c3,317C1C9BCDA0,You may also argue that there are no extracurricular activities that are offered that you want to participate in. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8214b4c17654,317C1C9BCDA0,"However, there is such a wide variety of things to do at most schools that there is something everyone can enjoy. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6cdb586f53a5,317C1C9BCDA0,"However if there isn't something you would want to participate in, most schools will help you create a new club that you can recruit people for and run with a teachers help. Even if people want to argue against this new rule, there are solutions to their complaints ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+34aecb0c2100,317C1C9BCDA0,"Overall, there are many benefits to participating in extracurricular activities. You get to do something you enjoy, you get to meet new people, you'll be happier, and although people may find ways to argue against the new requirements, the good outweighs the bad. There are plenty of options at most schools so that everyone can find something that they enjoy. There are plenty of different sports, there are debate clubs, the student council, yearbook committee, the school newspaper, theatre, and clubs for almost any interest someone may have. In conclusion, I agree fully with the principal's new decision and I believe that everyone should participate in some type of extracurricular as well. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2a4741306fcf,318C3D719F7C,"To maintain a healthy, active mind, many students are assigned an educational, summer-long project.
+
+These assignments vary from science experiments to maintaining a reading log; anything that would keep kids busy on their summer-long vacation.
+
+However, there is the question of if these summer assignments should be created by teachers or by the students themselves. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4de905cb0850,318C3D719F7C,"To create the optimal educational experience, summer projects should be self-administered ",Position,Effective,,,
+ed4c1aea5a43,318C3D719F7C,so that they are individualized for every student ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5ea92ecc61e,318C3D719F7C,"so they are easy to manage, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+485b2a511093,318C3D719F7C,and so students can learn how to be self-sufficient. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a622edb810c,318C3D719F7C,Providing students with the opportunity to take control of their own summer project makes the assignment more individualized. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dc507774dc97,318C3D719F7C,"Compare the idea of assigning a summer project to the scenario of a student choosing their classes; they are much more likely be perform well in a subject of their interest than in a random class enforced upon them.
+
+Relating this back to summer projects, students tend to better commit to a project that aligns with their interests.
+
+Also, Students are more motivated when they have control over their decisions.
+
+When people take a personal initiative towards what they do, they carry more pride and are more successful in their work.
+
+Personalization of summer projects produce more meaningful experiences that serve as a solid foundation for education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ded3cfcb0c0f,318C3D719F7C,"As students are away from school for a long three months, there is no other person better than the students themselves to manage a personal project.
+
+Teacher are not aware of the responsibilities or vacation plans of their students, so the expectations they would set might not be attainable for some students.
+
+For example, a student would not be able to keep up with an at-home project if they were away for the majority of their summer.
+
+Rather if they were to choose their own project, they could more easily manage how to carry out the project in consideration of their personal circumstance.
+
+In general, students would be better at following their own judgment when creating and completing their own project.
+
+Without any teachers to answer their questions over the summer, it is better for the students to be their own bosses. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2d02e6a9d304,318C3D719F7C,"If students were to create their own parameters for a summer-long project, it would be easier to manage because the students would be more knowledgeable of the requirements than if the project were assigned by a teacher. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+900d9b608a2f,318C3D719F7C,"Leaving a student to create and complete their own summer-long project would instill responsibility.
+
+At an age of maturation, students need to learn how to be self-sufficient. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+d45fe6ca8640,318C3D719F7C,"The responsibility of a summer-long project is comparable to that which is handled in the regular education students go through the other three seasons of the year.
+
+Students must learn to make decisions for themselves in school as they would have to for a summer project.
+
+A self-assigned project teaches many of the qualities innate to being an functioning adult.
+
+Many people must work by their own deadlines to make a living.
+
+Without responsiblity, which is taught be self-assigned summer projects, people would not be able to hold jobs to pay bills.
+
+The long vacation over summer is a oppertune time to hone personal skills necessary to getting by and thriving in life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+51e72e83a1f1,318C3D719F7C,"Through a self-created project, students can best investigate their personal intersets by setting and managing their own goals while developing responsibility along the way.
+
+When students can take it upon themselves to improve their education while on their summer break, they can find success and personal enrichment while still enjoying their vacation                                         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f5866424b136,31A3040F487C,I personally would prefer for my project to be a student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6bdbe55d8a5d,31A3040F487C,"you can choose from a variety of ideas, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e5b100fea79,31A3040F487C,"it would show more creative projects, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+85a91fa599cd,31A3040F487C,it would be different ideas ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+250c887fa97a,31A3040F487C,having a project to do over summer break is a great Idea to keep students brains functioning. If the project is teacher designed all students would have the same topic. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc712f903e58,31A3040F487C,with the project being student designed it would be more creative for students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b78a6c10d4a2,31A3040F487C,"different students are going to do their projects on different topics, If I had to do this project I would be very creative, And show lots of neatness, Also I would turn my project in on time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56f336612291,31A3040F487C,with the project being student designed it would be a lot of different ideas students can choose from ,Claim,Effective,,,
+05e652297906,31A3040F487C,student would also have time on their projects. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d3cf74a7756a,31A3040F487C,having a project over summer break is a good opportunity for students it wouldn't hurt to learn while on break ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+de15f954ca72,31B358884D0B,"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditiond on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. If you image blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or more miles above the roiling Venusian landscap, it would be a shocker. Temperatures would still be tasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would ber close to the level of the sea and Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e64776a98da,31B358884D0B,"I think the autors statement on this is that when the temperature drops its very hard to communitcate with people going up there, but when it cools down its better for them. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b85cd989864c,31B358884D0B,"The Earth and Beyond it should not be limited by dangers and douts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.
+
+There devices were the first envisioned in the 1800s an playedan important role in the 1940's during World War ll. The thoughts of computers in those days did caulations for them, which in today's years we know thing about. Many of the reserchers of the NASA is working on other approches to studying Venis. Like some are simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus' surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditiond. There a lot of projects that there looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. Using mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d35464cc8725,31F08BEA89C9,I think the rock that landed in mars was meybe because it had came from a diffrent place or maybe because the rock was to old or to heavy. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ac09cdb477b9,31F08BEA89C9,"The rock may have move to Mars or landed in Mars maybe because something hit it and it just went to a diffrent place and it landed in Mars.
+
+The rock maybe have laded and make or had a face shape from the way it landed. Im not so sure if it had landed like that to make a face shape. That's what I am thinking, is that it was like that from the way it had moved or it had changed. Some pople are surprised that they haved found a human face in the or in a planet. I know its kinda wierd but u never know what could happen.
+
+They say it had a human face. They say it had eyes and it had a nose and it had a mouth in the face. They should be scared because what if it was aliens that did that and that made the face. I would be scared but maybe it wasent the aliens maybe it was just regular. It just could've been Something regular or sothing natural that just happen. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+61e06d27d167,31F4831C794D,Student-designed summer projects would be more beneficial than teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d97e60ba7fd0,31F4831C794D,Students will have a wide variety of options to choose from ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1dd42b04a03e,31F4831C794D,Freedom to expresss themselves ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5259b5f7c0bb,31F4831C794D,their resources will be known. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1374a2387e95,31F4831C794D,"Back then when I was in 4th grade almost every other weekend my aunt would take my cousin,brother and I to this frozen yougurt place in Generic_City. The place was called frozen frog or something like that and we would just try all of the flavors when we got a chance it was amazing but we only could fill up the cup plus the toppings that we wanted,so we went ahead and made our choices and we said we would try something new the next time we went to that shop. Just like students we had the choice to do what we wanted to pick and get it done without someone else telling me to do what they wanted us to do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c601d8450db6,31F4831C794D,When I first started playing Mortal Kombat 11. I was so excited to try out all the new and old characters and see what new things they can do. I told myself I want to try and use different characters than the ones I use constantly. So I do so and realize that I never really play with Generic_Name or Generic_Name for some reason but then when I tried using them in a real fight it never really worked out. So I had convinced myself that it was all because I never learned their moves but then something hit me it wasn't that i haven't mastered their moves in such a small amont of time it was because their moves were just the same as Mortal Kombat X and I am not really good at working with close ranged fighters. My specialty was at fighting with those who can attack at any distance. Zoners were my best bet at winning any match. Also like students allowing people to see their limits can help others know what they are good at and what they aren't and they won't feel troubled because of a few minor things that were out of their control stop them from doing their job. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+93d8fa69a102,31F4831C794D,Truthfully it is just another way to tell someone no to doing this or that or it is a continuation of limiting people on their creativity. Back in 6th grade most people had a problem with the art tecaher because she had such strict rules in a way it was either her way or the highway. No one could really understand why she had us doing things this way or that way. With that being said everyone was hoping that one day she would actually miss a day and one day she called out but then I looked around me everyone was having a fun time because they could express themselves through their art. All students need to be able to express themselves without having someone telling them that they are doing things wrong. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7a42f20f7a13,31F4831C794D,some people might say that is not true and if we allow students to do whatever they feel like doing then how are we suppose to make them do anything educational and how do you think it is going to help them in life. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c2cf3bcdf424,31F4831C794D,allow some type of creativity in their life because you cannot tell me that you expect students to be told later on in the future to do this and this tep by step. That is never gonna happen no one is ever gonna hold another persons hand all the days of their life thta is why they need a bit of freedom =now so they can have some experience with it when they get older. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+615ceef73c69,31F4831C794D,"Allow studnets to have freedom in their life without having to be forced to do things,Students will have a wide variety of options and their limits are know through their experiences.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5025f99999ce,3245CF7D6A64,"Aliens, is this a realistic argument? On the serface of mars there is somthing impiticular. It's somthing that looks like a face. NASA decided that this would be a good way to get peoples attention. Now we are faced with the argument, could it have been aliens? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b4549a430ea8,3245CF7D6A64,the possibility of there being aleins is very unrealistic. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b23048fd455c,3245CF7D6A64,the face could have just been another butte or mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+79ac3adefe6a,3245CF7D6A64,The face could have just been a coincidence. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e1548117b94,3245CF7D6A64,"NASA, could just be saying this to get attention, but mabey not. Even if there was alein landform on mars, we will not be able to know for sure ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+df9821b43464,3245CF7D6A64,"Like any history, we only know through drawings or writing,and the only evidence we have is this face. Hopfully there will be more to find in near future. Or mabey evcen drawings will appear that we can interpit. If not, then all of NASA still has evidence that there could be ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5a0053b27740,3245CF7D6A64,"In conclusion, Mars will probably not hold anything else like this. The picture may look like a face, but its more like mesa or butte. or will there be mystirious things like this again? Proving that it was not a coincedence. Mabey NASA will find other things on different planets, or mabey not ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d796fc160a3c,3254ADC7B428,I am here because I am giving my opinion on whether students should have to participate in an extracurricular activity ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7f3a12cceea9,3254ADC7B428,"I think that it would be good for students in many ways, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+85e73e320241,3254ADC7B428,they might make new friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c75bbecbe894,3254ADC7B428,"This could happen because they would find other kids in they're group who enjoy the same things. Having friends makes school a lot easier and more fun. An extra bonus to having friends is that it is less likely for you to get bullied because you will have people to back you up. Even outside of school having friends is good. Like if you want to play basketball but you arent on a team, well boom! you could go to a court with your friends to run some games. In many ways having friends around will impact your life in good ways. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+62fb0a466c4c,3254ADC7B428,Another good reason for having to do activities is you could find out that your really good at something ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e44cb1881126,3254ADC7B428,"Like, what if you could play a mean harmonica without even knowing it? You wouldn't have a clue unless you signed up for an extra activity. You might even be a good chess player. Im pretty good at chess and I wouldnt have known that unless I played a quick game with a friend. You could even make new friends with your newly discovered skills. Some activities can help you later in life, like if you need to knit a rope because you got lost in a forest, or you need to know how to jump start a car because it broke down on the side of the road, well no problem you already know how to do it because of the activity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c82a66871dc6,3254ADC7B428,You could have a lot of fun doing some activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad4c41cdeb7a,3254ADC7B428,"Having fun is important because you dont want to have suicidal thoughts or depression. Being depressed could easily lead to bad grades and poor choices. Having fun is good because your life will just be better. You can do tons of things to have fun or be happy. Maybe your fun is reading, well then you could sign up for a book club. I have fun playing sports like basketball, or baseball. I like getting fresh air, so I play outside a lot. Again, having fun is so important it makes you want to try more things. Having fun can make people like you more so it could lead to you getting more friends, and having friends is also very important. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4dbc89891b04,3254ADC7B428,every student should be forced to do extracurricular activities. I definitely think it would help out tons of kids to do it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2472cd72a0f9,325B922888A7,Although many may say that there would be nothing to gain by researching Venus. There would be something gained when researching Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d43adf75593,325B922888A7,such as the history of Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87b261a88fc0,325B922888A7,Another would be the disigning of better stronger drone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a33f517d087,325B922888A7,The last reason would be to learn safe ways to stay on planets simular to Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2724d55c2b1d,325B922888A7,The know history of planets can teach us what we can do to help our own planet and what to avoid doing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ded8e4e28a6f,325B922888A7,"Stated in the article ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth"" the quote could teach us what not to do or we could end up near or similer to Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca14fd59f0f8,325B922888A7,Disigning better stronger drones that survive harder condicions such as Venus is a good thing because there could be other planets that could require that type of drone. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7e22eaa993e7,325B922888A7,"Stated in the article ""coulds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Scientists could find a planet that could be similer or alike to Venus and they may need a drone strong enough to survive the harsh conditions on the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4750643989d2,325B922888A7,Suvival on different planets that a scientist is researching is important and learning how to survive on Venus could be the first step. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a43f8d71fa0,325FE13C0550,"Can you imagine a computer guessing everyones emotions, and tell wether their sad, happy, confused, etc. Well a 3-D computer can model all 44 major muscles. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7cd454583dce,325FE13C0550,"Dr. Paul Echman the creater of FACS has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. using video imagery the computer can track these facial movements, the software can even recongnise mixed emotions. Inorder to identify all movements of one or more muscles is called an action unit. Using video imagery and recognising the facial movements the software can identify mixed emotions each expression is compared against a nuetral face. Every human can make the same face everyday, but you can probably tell when your friend is sad or happy just by looking at their face. While for somepeople its hard to tell when their friends feel happy, sad, confused etc. Dr. Huang got a picture of the Mona Lisa and made people look at it to tell if a computer can recognize your feelings. They also showed people a web ad that appears on a computer screen, If the person frowned the ad would change and when you smile a similar ad would appear. Dr. Huang predicts that a classroom computer will recognize when a staudent is becoming bored or confused.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d16e6116702,327077093C68,This is an essay about Venus. In this essay I am going to tell you about the Venus an is it worth pursuit despite all the dangers ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a65b46fe5f17,327077093C68,Venus is to me is yes it is worth pursuiting despite all of its dangers to the human life form ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fbbcdf99c321,327077093C68,I belive this cause how are we ever going to know the truth if we don't go and find it out for ourselfs ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+37f58d4d3b99,327077093C68,What really extist was there once life form on Venus. If so whendid they die or are they still there ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+34b6bd35d362,327077093C68,See we will never uncover the truth if we dont break out of our shell and go exporing to the unknown we have to do it. Nobody esle is going to go out into space and find out what is really up in space. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fecfbf59111b,327077093C68,"We have our theory about other life out in space, of the once vallys, mountains and the carter on the surface of Venus so that we have our theory that once a long long time ago there once were a form of life on Venus ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bef46e4d7f0b,327077093C68,"Now we have to think about how they lived, how they got their food, how they did all the thing sthat we as humans do but on a planet that has low gravit pulling you down. On Earth we have a greater about of gravit pull us down to the ground than Venus does. Earth has also more water than Venus does now, but what if that was to change . What if the planet Venus had more water than Earth. What if Venus and better things than Earth does. Then why did Venus died what had to happen to whipe out and whgole plant that had maybe life form of some sort and that we know had water and enough oxygen to have the livingh life form of some kind to kive there. So what did happen to the planet Venus. How did this onbce living planet now become with no life form of any kinds ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5995e1dddde4,327077093C68,The only danger of this idea of going to the planet Venus is that what if they don't make it home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0a0beda0398,327077093C68,"Whatif ther are other life form living on Venus still but we just dont know what they are or how they came about there are hunders of thing that we as human we have not yet discover. An maybe will never discover about how we got to where we are today. How we have got what we have today. These are thing that we may never truthy understand about where we came from. How we got to this day in time and how are we going to live these thing are unknown, till the end of time.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e890c20f6b77,32A121824D02,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because the planet itself is dangerous ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+54d7b219642d,32A121824D02,"Venus is the same as the Earth, I mean it is reffered to as Earth's ""twin"", but there both the same only because of the density and size. Both planets do have the same shape and density, but planet Earth is much more safer than Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80642772370d,32A121824D02,"Venus has a thick atmoshpere, so it makes it harder to breathe. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+978ae2b1e99b,32A121824D02,"For example, in the text it says,"" a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."" It's impossible for somoene to even live on Venus because of it's own atmosphere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79530e19b3b8,32A121824D02,Exploring and studying the planet Venus is actually challenging when you think about it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+05fee23a3411,32A121824D02,"People tried to study about the planet, people have tried to explore, but in the end, it ends up failing. For example, in the text it states, "" since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us."" This is explaining how bad the planet really is. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8113711adb2,32A121824D02,No spacecraft can even touch the ground on planet Venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9c689768c5a6,32A121824D02,"The reason why no spacecraft has touched down on planet Venus is because of the clouds itself. For example, in the text it explains,"" the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmoshpheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit, while Earth's highest temperature is at least 110 to 120 degrees. So planet Venus is very hot, that probably explains why no spacecraft can land on the planet because it's so hot in the planet that the clouds trap all that heat inside. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fcbdd743b8e,32A121824D02,"In conclusion, these are the reasons why the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c9a48722276e,32AA6576C80B,"I'm a scientist at NASA and I know that the face is just a natural landform. I have plenty of reasons why that is, and why it wouldn't be an alien. Yes, the face on Mars has become a pop icon, but that doesn't mean people could just assume it's an alien. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ce0ab7ec0e4e,32AA6576C80B,NASA has plenty information and data for why it's just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4cd6dcdaf450,32AA6576C80B,"My first reason is that NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The picture noted a huge rock formation which seemed to be a human head that had eyes, nose, and mouth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd7284a87c8b,32AA6576C80B,"You just have to think about it, those characteristics are obvious. I mean yes, it was found in Mars, but that doesn't mean it couldn't have been a human. People just have to think more into the possible and not the impossible, because everything is possible. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+735f3fbae9a1,32AA6576C80B,My second reason is that they photographed the face. Other scientists at NASA saw that it clearly looked like a human head. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a85c441a1ca1,32AA6576C80B,My third reason is that they even snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33795ef39a15,32AA6576C80B,"When the image first appeared on a JPL web site, it clearly revealed a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74c194343a76,32AA6576C80B,"This is why I, as a scientist at NASA think it's a natural landform and not an alien . these three reasons I have should make people think about it again and decide it's officially a human head. Those who believe it's an alien, should believe more in miracles. Anything could happen in Mars or any other place around the planet. This is only my opinion, but it sure makes me feel like I'm right about my thinking. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87f347ccbf49,32D94C1BA4A5,"In 1973, the first handheld cell phone was made. 23 years later, the first ever flip phone was introduced to the public. Cell phones have come a long way since they were first invented, and today people rely on them for more than just communication. Smartphones. For instance, can do anything you can imagine, and we rely on them so much there's no telling where we would be without them. In fact, people use their cell phones practically 24/7. People text on the toilet, stream music in the shower, and unfortunately, use their phones while driving. This is probably the worst thing about cell phones. Phone related car crashes are one of the most common causes of fatalities in teens and adults. 1.6 million crashes a year are the result of people using their phones while driving. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6c4593c54581,32D94C1BA4A5,"No one, not even the most skilled driver in the world should be able to use a cell phone in any way while driving. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+986542f5604c,32D94C1BA4A5,"It's not always easy to control a vehicle. Weather conditions, traffic, and other people make driving very difficult sometimes. If you add the distraction of a cell phone, driving is 10 times more difficult to focus on. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ff686a388a59,32D94C1BA4A5,"You've probably seen someone text and drive. In the few seconds they take to glance away from the road and at their phones, a car crash could happen. It only takes one second for your car to swerve into the other lane. Phones should never be used while driving for many reasons, and the main reason being that it is extremely dangerous. Texting and driving makes you 23% more likely to get in an accident. It's so much smarter to wait until you've reached your destination to use your phone. If you can't wait, you can pull over on the side of the road. If not, you could greatly risk your life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8523ab151d51,32D94C1BA4A5,Another important reason why operating a phone while driving should be prohibited involves other drivers as well as passengers that may ride in your car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9fc4772feb45,32D94C1BA4A5,"When someone rides in your vehicle, whether its a friend or your child, you are responsible for them. By using your phone at the wheel, you put both you and your passengers at risk of injury or even death. You also put the strangers driving beside you at risk. Texting and driving doesn't just risk you. Most fatal car crashes involve more than one car. If you don't want to live with the fact that you hurt someone you love or even just a stranger, using your phone while driving shouldn't be an option. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+286ea8fabc39,32D94C1BA4A5,"Lastly, in some states, using your phone while driving is illegal and can cost you a lot of money ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6fed7dc6ab29,32D94C1BA4A5,"In georgia, for instance, holding a cellphone while not parked, or even pressing one button on a phone can get you a ticket. With each offense, the fines get larger. It's not worth paying a large ticket to send a short text message. Additionally, if someone dies in a car crash because of your actions, such as texting and driving, you could be charged with vehicular manslaughter and go to jail for up to 20 years. Texting and driving tickets, if shown on a police report for a wreck you are responsible for, will greatly increase your insurance rates, making your life a lot harder than it was before you decided to text and drive. Unless you have a money tree in your backyard and don't mind ridiculous insurance for the rest of your life, its best to wait until you get home to use your phone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+897b97095c89,32D94C1BA4A5,"In conclusion, it's hard to imagine why anyone would think using a phone while driving is a good idea. Nothing good can come from texting or talking on the phone behind the wheel. The best decision anyone can make is to completely forget about their phones while driving and focus on the road. You risk so many things by using your phone while operating a vehicle.. You risk your life, your friends life, strangers lives, and even the money in your pocket. The only exception to being on a phone while driving should be to report an emergency. Otherwise, the use of a cell phone is risky and should be completely banned all over the world. Statistics alone should be enough to open people's eyes to the dangers of using their phone in the car. Phones are distracting and without a doubt should not be used while operating a vehicle. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2c1a483382d6,32E2949B0C66,"Do you ever want to do something fun at your school that you really like? Well you came to the right school, cause the principal made a rule that you either have to play a sport or join a club that you like.
+
+You could play on a basketball team
+
+You could play on a football team
+
+You could play on a flag football team
+
+You could play on a baseball team
+
+You could play on a softball team
+
+You could play for a soccer team you could join a cheering team ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+199bbe0f3729,32E2949B0C66,I agree with the principal ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00d34ed71058,32E2949B0C66,"hen we get home we don't do anything and kids are lazy nowadays. We either take a nap, eat, watch YouTube, or play video games. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e96f34ab13c0,32E2949B0C66,Also it will give kids a chance to have fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17f78eb97960,32E2949B0C66,make new friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aaf938ed643d,32E2949B0C66,see what they like so they can do it the future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d2382ffc3fd,32E2949B0C66,"kids are overweight, they're lazy, most of them won't do anything cause they are out of shape. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e785b818266,32E2949B0C66,"Probably the first thing they do when they get his eat and play video games and watch YouTube. So that is why the principal put in the new rule, they could make new friends while they're after school or join something their friends are in. Also it will be good if your going to play in high school sports cause you already known what it takes to be on the sport team. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32f3e41efef5,32E2949B0C66,It is really fun cause you when you play a game that is home you will feel good cause everyone from your school is there cheering you on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+266a49b78829,32E2949B0C66,"Also if you win your game at home it feels nice cause everyone is cheering your team on and then when you go back to school everyone will be taking about the win. If you don't believe me ask anyone that plays/played for a school team, most likely your parents played for a school team both of my parents did. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e13c4a144385,32E2949B0C66,"If your not interested in sports you could do other afters school activities like
+
+Book club
+
+Yearbook club
+
+Dance club
+
+Cooking club
+
+Computer club
+
+Student council
+
+Engineering club
+
+You could do those clubs in stead of playing sports ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a70408cfc9f9,32E2949B0C66,"You could also do many other things that you like if you don't like any of this thing. Ask your teacher if you could make club and if she says yes go to her office. If you don't like your club cause everything was filled it is fine, cause you could join it the next semester but you have to be one of the first to sign the sign-up sheet. Also you be given a snack at the beginning of your after school period you could choose anything and, if you take the bus it will be there so you can go home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a81fd873c9a,32E2949B0C66,But if you don't take the bus you will have to be picked up by 4:30 and then you be home and do whatever you want to do. But if your parent can pick you after school you could leave at the normal time school gets out and if your not feeling good you could also leave at the normal time. But before you could anything you have to do your homework and then go to your after school club. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+495fd4582f79,32E2949B0C66,"If you don't want to go you will have to go to the principal and explain why you can't, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+985fea4f63a9,32E2949B0C66,if it is a dumb reason you will have to go to after school. Like if you have a broken leg and you play on a sport team you could still go to practice and see what they are doing and see al the drills they are doing. Also if you fake an injure and the teacher find your big trouble cause you not listening to the principal. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40dd1f54de8b,32E2949B0C66,"But you could get kicked out if your being bad and you will have to serve a punishment cause your still on school grounds. Like you you hit a student you will get suspended but if you hit the teacher you will get expelled.
+
+If your playing sports it is all year long until the season ends, if your coach finds out your is taking drugs you will get kicked of the team. You will have the same rules as a high school cause you probably play for the high school team. But it won't costs any money cause the principal made us join the clubs so we could do something after school. Most likely we will find our hobby forever cause we are going to do it for the rest of the semester. If you find something that someone is doing and you want to do it just tell the teacher cause they will put you guys together. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b21dc954598,32E2949B0C66,"If you still don't agree with me you should just try it out cause it fun, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dcc7f88f5842,32E2949B0C66,"You could have fun, make new friends and bond over things you all like. Like sports if you join one of the sport teams you could meet someone with same interest like you. Same with all the other club that the school is providing to the students, like book club you could like the same book as someone else and be best friend over that one book cause you joined the book club. I met one of my best friend through basketball and we liked other stuff that wasn't basketball related. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a623272da8bf,32E2949B0C66,Most likely you won't like it at first but then when your half-way through the year you will love it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e62eaaa0702,32E2949B0C66,"Most of the time I join a club that i like cause it fun to meet new people that have the same interest as you. Sometimes the club isn't fun but that is okay cause you could join a new one. Most of the time everyone will be shy at the beginning cause no one knows each other but half way through the semester you will known everyone. Cause everyone won't be shy cause they will see you everyday plus, when your in school at lunch and you don't known anyone and you see one of those people you could sit with them. When you meet a new person they will have friends so you could more friends when the new person shows you to them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d926d0172568,32E2949B0C66,So what we know is that joining an after school program could give you a lot of benefits and friend. Also they is a lot of clubs and sports you could join for fun. Also eat a free snack so your not hungry when you get home to your parents.        ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5a58186b08ae,331502EB3762,This story is about a new technology that is called a Facial Action coding system that are able able to recognize other people faces. I'm explaining what I think about people using a facial recognition. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d3626df5dc1a,331502EB3762,This whole facial recognition thing is awesome and I think that it is safe for us humans. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+23e4d297fc5d,331502EB3762,"These people can actually use it for there iphones now. For example a person uses a facial recognition for his phone,that's good because because can't nobody else can get into his device.
+
+The thing about it is who was the person to come up with this idea I think its cool but there using up all this technology. I think that there is a reason for everything and I wonder what made that that person come up with that idea. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0e96bfd768f,331502EB3762,Another reason why I think this is a cool idea is because it knows who you are even when you have on different face expression ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a35db74f6afe,331502EB3762,That's amazing how a computer can express how we feel .I 'm so surprized that a computer can do that. I some time ask myself how do they do that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+787815f1195b,331502EB3762,"I think that computers would need a lot of energy to do that I don't know it's amazing. I sometimes think that it is not impossible for this to happen but it really is. I think about all the gadgets that my mom had back then. I would usually say that they're going to make alot of different things in the future. Their already trying to make self-driving cars.
+
+This story is amazing. I think that there are going to be more things that are going to surprise me. This one is the first greatest techonolgy I ever heard about. When I grow up I dont want to use all of this technology because I think that it is to much for me. I would consider only using something simple. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+34c743b786a0,331502EB3762,This story told me alot. It told me what a computer could do that i never knew about which is surprizing. I just told my story about how i'd feel about all this new technology. That story was interesting and I think that I would probably use that one day. If I would use it I would be careful with it. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+12de31ee437f,336F8093CF86,in the beginning of the story it is saying that the people and cars are able to work together because it will stay there and be with them most of that. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b0f05ca484e0,336F8093CF86,Then there are the casws of the underly populate areas in a city so they might go and vreate an area for them to live and play around in. They might have just gotten taken in as if the were to go and drive or even walk with them for as long as possnle. Then there are the way some of them that are driving a certain car for a time being until they were able to help the enviornment that is neer by. Then in the second passage it is saying that people will try to use there cars less so that the smog will go fading little by little or is it going to start to disapate. I must say that it might take a while until they might have made it at the time they could have done it so they might even try to create a day when no one will be using a car so they might get a better life and they might be able to pervent smog also and they might get to a part of the atmoshere and depleat the ozone layer making the sun even harsher for us. So these are the things about the people that were trying to stop the bad effects on the inviornment.  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fb57cfa14396,3383B3E35D18,"If I was arguing with some one that the face on mars was not real and that it was some thing that just happend on its own I think that it could go both ways and that it could of been an alien but it really just probly happend on its own. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c67b37a17a1b,3383B3E35D18,"We could argue and argue about this subject but if I was a scientist I would make a camera that could go farther and depper into mars outmasphere so we could see what was going on for some days to mounths to see what would happen if nothing happend then I would be right if we seen aliens there then he would be right.
+
+But it would be alot easyer said then done to make that camera that can go that far into space to see that much for that long it would not be a easy task. But for the sack of seeing if aliens were real then it would be worth making to see if aliens are real or not. Because that would change every thing that we now about a different life force then use. It would blow up I would become famus nowing im the one that made the camera. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76ac71c88f72,3383B3E35D18,And not even that i would prove that guy in the lab wrong that it is not even aliens that it is just sand and rock. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5097cde6e866,3383B3E35D18,"But It would be pretty cool to see aliens and we only seen this way back in 1976 I wonder how long it has been there it could be billions to only 40 years old. But i would get to work to see if i could build the camera to send to mars and see what was going on on mars. And if I was to build it and if it would work I would keep it there on mars untill it ran out of battries and if there was yto be nothing then I would be right but if there was to besomething then that guy from the lab would of been right. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4cf1f69f8ac,3383B3E35D18,But that is what i woud do if I was a sientist that worked for NASA abd there was a big argument about what it was then that is what I would do to see just make a camera to see which one was right me or the guy in the lab. Hopfully I would even be able to build that if i was a scientist that worked for NASA.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2ab294314397,340734FCEDC4,"The implications of technology that can detect emotions simply by reading the muscles in the face sound truly remarkable. The thought that one can tell what another is thinking simply by plugging data or maybe even a picture into an algorithm sounds like fiction, but may soon be a reality. The article, ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto briefly discusses the possible use of such technology in a classroom. The system could examine student's faces, and if they read to be unengaged or uninterested, could adjust the lesson to make learning more interesting to that group of students. That type of technology could revolutionize learning, and customly tailor lesson plans to the feelings of students on any given day. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+99ceb1521d47,340734FCEDC4,"Technology that reads people's emotions would be beneficial in a classroom setting, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+df593d6509f3,340734FCEDC4,because it would adjust lesson plans ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+66ff7163be95,340734FCEDC4,"make learning more fun, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd93689a7c04,340734FCEDC4,"and could also help students struggling to focus in class. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e753f5db6d3f,340734FCEDC4,"The technology to read emotions would greatly change the way students learn. If a teacher used this technology and noticed that all of his students were bored and uninterested, he could alter the lesson plan to make it more fun ",Claim,Effective,,,
+52d28d739427,340734FCEDC4,"Not all students will feel the same, though, which is also where this technology could come in. At the beginning of a school year, perhaps, the teacher could use the technology on the class to see how they feel about the particular subject. Then, the students who are excited about the subject and show interest could be sorted into a class that can be run in a way that makes the class educationally suitable for students who actually want to learn that subject. The students that do not show as much interest, or none at all, could be sorted into a seperate class that makes the subject more fun, but still teaches the same points as the other class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ac1d80684ca,340734FCEDC4,Another application of such technology in the classroom could help to make learning overall more fun for all students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9220c1ad0731,340734FCEDC4,"If many students start to become bored, then the teacher could come up with a quick game to enrich the learning experience. If many of the students are already interested with the subject matter, the teacher may not have to do as much adjusting. If the students need to be enriched with games and activities, now the teacher will immeditely know. This could overall make learning a lot more fun, but introducing more games and activities into the curriculum as see fit. If the students want to play knowledge enriching games, they can just show disinterest, and the system would pick that up and inform the teacher. The technology to read student's emotions in the classroom as a very basic level could make learning more fun and personal to the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+091e678c6f8c,340734FCEDC4,Reading students emotions would also be helpful to identify those students who are struggling to focus or simply understand the material being presented to them in class ,Claim,Effective,,,
+793ea05af023,340734FCEDC4,"If a student shows confusion or discontent, it may be able to pick that up and show the teacher specific students that need help. The teacher could take the student aside and ask if they need help, and then adjust their learning accordingly. Another way this technology could help struggling students is to set them up with tutors that are doing well in the class. If a student is excited to learn consistantly during that class period, they could be sat next to a struggling student in order for the one not doing as well to recieve help from a peer. The ability to read emotions in the classroom would help students who are struggling tremendously. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c11cc880c33,340734FCEDC4,"Adjusting lesson plans, making learning more fun, and helping struggling students are three of the main reasons in which emotion-reading teachnology would be amazing to introduce into the classroom. The students would control the class, not the teacher, and it would make the learning experience more customized to each particular class. As well, it would allow for more interesting games and activities to be introduced into the curriculum in order to keep learning entertaining and entriching. Students who struggle with particular subjects would be able to recieve help using the technology, and the teacher would not have to guess which students are struggling only based on grades. The technology of emotion-reading should be applied to all classrooms when it becomes widely available, because it could help both teachers and students improve the learning environment. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c2b660e60c0a,3415EF8F87AA,You should particpate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+460a08f7a2aa,3415EF8F87AA,It is a great way to get out and help people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e875c4275b7e,3415EF8F87AA,You also can have fun with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ab53b3f4386,3415EF8F87AA,You could help people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8ec16811b01,3415EF8F87AA,"getting them food,water, animals,and more. They lost thing in the war,so cloths on them can be good. They will be so thankful for your help. That will be alsome to do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d04e6efeb6f6,3415EF8F87AA,You could have fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8909e8f33c09,3415EF8F87AA,"You could bring your friends and family and you could work together. You could make someone day shine with a smile. You could look around the ocean and look for animals. That what would be fun. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+792333cb4aaf,3415EF8F87AA,"we need more people to take care of are plant, and go do things that can help it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2464a2e6f14d,3415EF8F87AA,"This could help it so much. We could change people's lives by doing this. This is a important job for people, because it could keep people from dieing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9fc4fdfa763,3415EF8F87AA,"You should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is fun and you can help people. It also can change lives in a good way and keep people from starvation. I hope you join, becaues we need you too.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4ad039b0e44c,346934F6BA88,"I always did love taking care of animals and doing other stuff as a crew of the Seagoing Cowboys.
+
+I am here because many people argue whether be a Seagoing Cowboys is something you should do. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+17aa926ab3d6,346934F6BA88,I believe that being a Seagoing Cowboy is worth the risk ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7beb74b67ce4,346934F6BA88,help people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78754b2dc95a,346934F6BA88,just have fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6aa2dd7319d4,346934F6BA88,Helping people in need is really what matters in lfe ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49bd4b3b2427,346934F6BA88,"Its really in every human job there is. A dentist helps your teeth keep clean, a teacher helps you learn, and a mechanic helps you fix your car. Almost every human job out there is all about helping people. In my case I got to help people in need after World War II . I was in a group called UNRRA, which was a group who helped pople in animals and food supplies. I feel good now that I know I got to serve countries that were left in ruins. I am sure mighty proud that I became a Segoing Cowboy. It helped me realize that not only I need help but other people are also in need of help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca99df24aae9,346934F6BA88,I also had lots and lots of fun while I was a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+613c1fb0526e,346934F6BA88,"In case you ever got bored, there was no problem playing games. There were so many to choose from. There was baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling. I was so entertained. When we played games the time flew by as if it were a cheetah on the clock. There was usually no way you could have got bored with all the choices you had as entertainment. This is another reason why you should join Seagoing Cowboys. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a4a916aa732,346934F6BA88,"I will warn there will be risks in doing this though. I know it sounds kind of dangerous, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1e3f89067f13,346934F6BA88,"I believe that it is worth it, and I would know. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bba59760ca6b,346934F6BA88,"I once was night watchman, I had to check that every thing was going smoothly. Everything was going okay untill I slipped on a ladder and fell on my backside. I was heading for a entrance at the side of the boat, but a small strip of metal stopped my slide. I could have flown straight into the Atlantic Ocean. I also had broken ribs so I coulndn't work ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72a7764fe55e,346934F6BA88,Even though this happened I am still very grateful that I am alive and still helping people in need. I feel good putting my life at risk for millions of people in need. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42d448731c3c,346934F6BA88,"I know that there is risk but it is worth it. You get to have fun and have a good feeling in your heart, all for just helping people in need. I am grateful for the oppurtunity, and it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. I do believe that being a Seagoing Cowboy is worth it. Who knows maybe you'll become the next one.                    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ab4749e87f80,34B96B0F6EBD,"With a time like this, your country needs you most. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+071a06b8a879,34B96B0F6EBD,That is one of the many reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be824b49d679,34B96B0F6EBD,you will see amazing sights ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9f1f5e2898b,34B96B0F6EBD,have fun while you work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91e008b3dbde,34B96B0F6EBD,"When you join the program, you will have opportunities to see parts of the world you never thought you would see. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+101a1799d71a,34B96B0F6EBD,"You will see Europe, China, and even Greece. You an even take a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, or marvel at the sight of the Panama Canal. You can see th Acropolis in Greece and castles in Crete. But those are not the only benifits. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de2100b10cf3,34B96B0F6EBD,"Even tough taking care of animals is hard work, you still have time to have fun. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c58614054b6,34B96B0F6EBD,"When we unload the animals, We often do things to pass the time where we used to keep them. Games like baseball, volleyball, and even table-tennis tournaments.
+
+We sometimes do boxing, fencing, whittling, reading, and other games. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c408095d1ab2,34B96B0F6EBD,"When you join the Seagoing Cowboys you will open up a world of opportunities. But it is much more than just an adventure, it opens up the world to you. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d32aee609ee3,34C979F3ABAA,Is there an advantage to limit the car usage ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ea86a6af6f7c,34C979F3ABAA,There alot of diffrent advantages ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6826ef3d5b63,34C979F3ABAA,promoting ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+461645ee618c,34C979F3ABAA,protection ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+439210ca27fb,34C979F3ABAA,bills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d31a2b95d4a,34C979F3ABAA,"the united states who is promoting the new communities that are less dependent on cars , (rosenthal) if you think about its a good thing because then it gives us less usage and thats a good thing not a bad thing for the people who think so its not .promoting is like you trying to sell somthing to someone and making it sell .thats what you call promoting somthing. the goal is to promote alterative transportation and reduce smog,(selsky) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e873aad94299,34C979F3ABAA,"If the usage is reduce then the the greenhouse gases will reduce emissions from tailpipes ,(rosenthal) and thats a good thing becuase if you think about it it cant be a bad thing and never will be a bad thing .The greenhouse gases are a good thingnot somthing bad it helps plants grow. Millions of colombians biked,skated or took buses ,(selsky) and that even uses less green house gases. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ea278b11acb,34C979F3ABAA,"There will be bills passed 80 percent of apprpiation have gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport, (rosenthal) and that makes it better if we have bills passed because that mean that we can do more if the laws are passed by the government. It was the third year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the day without cars,(selsky). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d378b53bb5c9,34C979F3ABAA,"the three advantages are that promoting , protection and the bills . That all helps  limit the usage of the cars. well thats all for now. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7160e4a9b009,35011B0C0225,"In America, we use vehicles on a daily basis to get around.  You either drive a vehicle that you own, ride a bus, take a taxi, ride a bike, or walk.  It is rare to see someone walking or riding a bike these days, but that is because we are so dependant on motor vehicles.  If you take a look at other countries, you will realize that they are taking steps to cut back on the use of motor vehicles to help stop pollution.
+
+It is uncommon in the U.S. for a whole town of people to ""give up"" their cars, let alone pay $40,000 for a parking space and a house.  In Vauban,Germany, this ""smart planning"" movement was introduced to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions and the amount of cars in the area.  ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"" said Heidrun Walter, a mother of two and media trainer.  70 percent of families living in Vauban do not own cars and walk or ride bikes to reach their destinations.  The town is not completely ""car free,"" there is a main thoroughfare that runs from downtown Freiburg.  Considering the town was only built about ten years ago, they are helping our environment in a big way.
+
+Smog is a big problem in Paris,France.  After several days of ""near-record pollution,"" Paris temporarily baned driving to clear the cities air.  About 4,000 drivers recieved a 22-euro fine and 27 of those drivers had their cars impounded because of their reaction to their fine.  The fine worked and the cities congestion was down to 60 percent after five days of the smog.  The cities weather was part of the reason why there was so much smog, but some people believed it had to do with the diesel fuel that was used throughout France.  The public transit was free from Friday to Monday, but the smog eventually cleared and the band was lifted.           ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a322d301e71b,352777B2AE3D,The author doesn't support his own idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bd39fb25ada5,352777B2AE3D,He lists the good of what would happen with some facts ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+addf745d3f98,352777B2AE3D,"The dangers are stacked high with exlporing Venus. With the temperture on Venus at the surface being over 800*F which in a spacesuit can still fry a person alive, and the litteral aicd rain, could malt the suit and well there goes a dead man. Even if we somehow manage to make a spacesuit that isn't going to melt or fry a person on Venus, then we can explore it. Tech these days is our down fall, we create tech thatwe use everyday, but with all the space exploration that is our go to, because we don't have the tech now to send a person from one side of the galaxy to the other. Once we do that then we can explore. Venus maybe closer to us, but there is no water present on the surface therefor no life could be living on that planet. To study Venus we would have to send someone there to collect samples, at which they have about 80% chance of death right at the moment, and a 20% chance of living ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26141b2dd44b,352777B2AE3D,"Do we want to risk someone just to explore a plant, when we haven't fully explored ours? What sence does that make? ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4664053eac75,35694DE1F9DE,"What is the reason why there is a face shape in Mars? No one know how it become a human face or if it a human face at all, and some think the reason behind it is that there are evidence showing live in Mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8d03863e773c,35694DE1F9DE,"I agree that the shape is a human face shape, but I also believe is just a landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fe587a7f805d,35694DE1F9DE,"The reason is that as it stated in the article, the face is to attrack the people. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2f75ba376d93,35694DE1F9DE,"The first reason to support my claim is that the face is use to attrack people, so that the people who made up the idea can earn the money ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bdb92882edd5,35694DE1F9DE,"According to paragraph three it said that,""huge rock formation.. which resembles a human head... formed by shadowss giving the illusion of eyes,nose and mouth."" Following the evidence is that also on paragraph three it say,"" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to enage the public and attract attention to Mars."" This evidence tell me that with the idea of having a human face in Mars, it allowed people to think and believe what they told them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd903f7bd0fa,35694DE1F9DE,"On paragraph twelve, Garvin say that,"" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b8fb9e1794d4,35694DE1F9DE,"The second reason is that the face was due to a land form. The evidence not only gave me the idea of how it was form, it also give me the idea of how it reminded them of the a real life thing happen in the United State. We can already agree with this evidence that the idea of the formation for a human face was due to landforms. Also when in a different planet landform are still the same as the earth by how the land change. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4bfd4adce766,35694DE1F9DE,"There may be live in Mars, and no one know that is true. In any case the Face of Mars might looked like a real human face, but if you look closely at the face that viking take in 2001, it doesn't look like a face. In the picture it show how the landform change it, and that the reason for why there are no Face in Mars. This argument will show you why the Face of Mars is just any landform like you see in earth.                  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+79fc7bf1ee76,35C1EF0AD877,"Students want summer to be homework free, and not have to worry about summer projects. Most students will agree that summer is meant to give the brain a rest. Meant to give students time to have fun, be free, and enjoy the few months before school starts up again. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6d5af9d56996,35C1EF0AD877,"Although some may disagree, schools should require summer work for students. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+44a9b3f54a95,35C1EF0AD877,"Students will come back to school from summer completely refreshed; however, if they don't do a summer project, they will feel lost. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+380855624d93,35C1EF0AD877,"Some schools require a book report, or some sort of homework from some of your classes. Those book reports and homework keep you from forgetting the essentials in learning. The point is to make sure that there is some educational activity, and assure that students won't forget basic resources. Becoming lost mentally can feel like being dropped in a random part of the world. Without having some sort of tracker to keep students focused over the summer, students would feel lost and confused when they came back. Recovering from being confused and lost is easier said than done. As classes continue to progress, not knowing what happened before is brutal. Summer projects help prevent that with continual learning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f656f751e57,35C1EF0AD877,Assigning the projects to students can show the teacher many things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc55c6d66c10,35C1EF0AD877,"Summer projects can show the teacher what type of learner their student is. They can show what they've learned, their capabilities, and how much effort they put into their work. Teachers want their students to pass, and care about all of their students. Summer projects are ways to learn about their students and follow their progress. Summer projects help students get prepared for the lesson they will learn. Students being prepared for an upcoming lesson is essential in order to not make the students feel confused at the beginning. A strong start to a school year can determine the rest of the year. Students don't know how much a summer project has taught them until the year starts. When the student understands the lesson being taught, the school year will come much easier. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b66689eaa09,35C1EF0AD877,"Summer projects are frowned upon by most students. Although some may disagree, schools should require summer work for students. Students not feeling lost and keeping a influential mind set during summer is essential for a good school year. Teachers assigning the projects and learning their students writing and learning methods is key for helping students in the future. Summer projects are useful for students, but are frowned upon because they don't let the students have as much freedom as they want. Some projects may seem unfitting and unnecessary; however, they keep the minds running and working efficiently. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+78ecf4960f99,35DA1D474645,"Venus is sometimes called the "" Evening Star"". It is one of the bright points of light in the night sky. Venus is also more closely to earth then any other planet. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8b89c803afda,35DA1D474645,Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+136a33ab12b1,35DA1D474645,because is our planetary neightbor. Venus is a Earth's twin. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c51c23e0056,35DA1D474645,"Humans have sent numerous of spacecrafts to venus but for inly a couple of hours. Which actually is a good idea because not one single spaceship was able to go back to Venus more then three decades ago. Venus is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Venus planet surface is almost 800 degrees
+
+Farenheit.
+
+The conditions are far more extreme then anything humas encounter on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+02eac316c9bd,35DA1D474645,"Venus could have probably be covered in large amounts of oceans and could have been supported by humans. It could be hard ot go back to Venus becuase of the pressure that spaceship could get. In order to go back, they have to try and make the mission both safe and scientifically productive. But it could not be productive if the solar power is plentiful and the radiation would not exceed Earths levels ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a888b77baa4,35DA1D474645,"It could be easy conditions to some humnas, but not all. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+837527ae50de,35DA1D474645,"However, NASA is working on some approches to get to Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0eb5db49f3a6,35DA1D474645,"Some simplified electronics made of silicone carbide, have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick. but it can be extremly delicate when it comes to physical conditions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86aa937cb1cd,35DA1D474645,The traveling on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edged of imagination and innovation. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0943d2745d7e,360B5117F715,"Taking a deep breath in a city filled with cars and buses, people would be inhaling all the emissions giving off by the heavy duty use of cars. Taking in smog is like breathing in dirt. Changes around the world are taking place to accomodate to the impacts caused by cars. In the twenty-first cenury, cars are a must to get from place to place. So, why is it that there is a decline in the buying of cars? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+206b89ccebed,360B5117F715,"no smog to inhale, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5921588924fa,360B5117F715,"promote alternative transportation, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cba724478283,360B5117F715,the culture in this society helps create less dependence on cars which leds to a better envrionment. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d6695ce9c1aa,360B5117F715,"First things first, around the world something known as ""smart planning"" is taking place. This is a movement to seperate suburban life from auto use ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02160e11beb8,360B5117F715,"One main reason this movement is taking place is to reduce emissions giving off by automobiles, that would soon lead to smog. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9921b16b31b3,360B5117F715,the less dependence of cars would promote alternative transportation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f1a3b6bc9bd,360B5117F715,"Having a city filled with people walking, riding bikes, and taking buses would allow a traffic free city. In Europe, cities are taking the step forward by creating a city where it is difficult to obtain a car. According to
+
+Source 1:
+
+""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, explains the main motive why cities are making it difficlt to use cars, which is, ""Its basic precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accesible to public transprtation, with less space for parking."" This means, that by making it a struggle to obtain a car, it would help promote others to use public transportation or another method, which at the end of the day, would benefit the environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91a6cc879fa0,360B5117F715,"Last but not least, the culture of the world is constanly changing day by day. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+af7b8f17d5bf,360B5117F715,"In the twenty-first century, technology has taken over the lives of many. From apps to the internet, the changes are inevitable thanks to the breakthrough in technology.  In
+
+Source 4:
+
+""The End of Car Culture,"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University, explains,""Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift."" Mimi is talking about the recent decline of automobile sales occuring which mean less and less people are buying cars. She believes the reason behind the decline is due to the culture in which involves technology. Moreover, she goes on to say,"" Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work."" Again and again technology proves to be a saving factor in this world to humans, and in this case it is saving humans from injurying the only home it has. With the easy access of calling someone up for a ride or searching up public transportation near by, allows the environment to be fresher and cleaner, as well as, it allows humans to interact with one another without having to drive to that person's house. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34683b3253a5,360B5117F715,Movements take place to improve what seems to be a problem. It is obvious that the over usage of cars is a problematic case. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+10a9bc7bddbf,360B5117F715,"Around the world, people are going around side by side, without depending on cars like they use to back a couple years ago. Improvements shown in places like Paris, shows how the limiting of automobile usage can greatly impact the envrionment to create a clean atmosphere. Not only would it help clear smog, but it would allow a stress free city from being populated by traffic jams and yelling individuals, who are experiencing road rage thanks to the taffic. A happier environment would be created when people are out rding bikes to places and walking with friends. In cocnclusion, the benifits of limiting car usage are as clear as water, it would reduce smog, promote other forms of transprtation, and would help our culture by creating a happier, cleaner atmosphere to live in.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+75b82799dd29,360DAF43CFF9,The author supports his claims by giving the reader information on how Venus is a challege to explore ,Position,Adequate,,,
+92aa208fc861,360DAF43CFF9,with it's thick atmoshphere ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ecd6b35dccbd,360DAF43CFF9,and hot surface ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2baed5fb51b,360DAF43CFF9,A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrisive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7be407f0b56,360DAF43CFF9,"The author also claims that Venus is very hot like flaming hot, over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and that is one of the main reason why it's so challenging to land on Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+80be454d3335,360DAF43CFF9,"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cf295c35f35,360DAF43CFF9,The reasons on why scientists are still discussing about Venus today is because Venus is the only planet that use to look like earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d88c300d296,360DAF43CFF9,"with its rocky terrain and with that Astronmers are fascinated. ""If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its sureface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3616b0a79c2a,360DAF43CFF9,However it is dangerous and that's the only thing that's stopping NASA from sending a human to Venus ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f78957163396,360DAF43CFF9,"because of the harsh conditions, and also Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. ""These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ced181286a44,360DAF43CFF9,"The author supports his claims by providing pros and cons on ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus."" 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+98330233eff8,360DAF43CFF9,"The author explains on how NASA is studying Venus and how they can get images by sending a little ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet so it can provide limtied images on the ground surface. ""However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard froms of photographyand videography ineffective."" Many researchers are working on machines that would allow the machines to stay on Venu's surface longer. ""Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of Venus."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0904021dd42c,360DAF43CFF9,"Venus is a challenge to get to with its hot surface, with its thick atmosphere, and atmospheric pressure. But scientists and astronomers are facinated by Venus, because they believe it had oceans and could have supported various forms of life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+38a4c70ec99d,3679FD464B98,"Mona Lisa is a famous painting by Leonardo da Vinci. There is many theories of Mona Lisa being sad, or feeling many other emontion but no body knows the truth but Da Vinci. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+59a8b5d4bbf8,3679FD464B98,"Based on the text evidence,
+
+"" Making Mona Liza Smile,""
+
+a new software called Facial Action Coding System has been developed to try infenitfing Mona Lisa's facial expressions. She could have up to six different basic emontions.
+
+First of all, Mona Lisa overall expressions use she is 83% happy.
+
+Based on this article, "" the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). each expression is compared against neutral face (showing no emotion)."" This is saying that even that she shows no expressions, she is certainly happy but might be having mix feelings as well.
+
+Another reason Mona Lisa can be feeling disgusted, fearful, or even angry but yet she's very mysterious. In the text it says, "" most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84f2912973c0,3679FD464B98,"If humans have trouble figuring out if something is feeling happy or sad, how can a software be able to do such thing. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+654a807496a4,3679FD464B98,"The software FACS is interesting becuase it's able to know your emotions with any movement you do. For example, in the text it says, "" even though individuals often show varying degress of expressions. Using a video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks thsee facial movements."" If a gental move can determine an emotion, this software will have a challenge on finding out Mona Lisa's emotions because it's just a painting.
+
+Therefore, Mona Lisa will be mysterious until the software identifies her emotions. Mona Lisa is and will always be a unique peice of art. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d3c06d51994c,36F89CC566E6,"Can we calculate our emotions like math? Even we don't use this kind of techonology we can tell other people emotions by looking at their face. If we known all about what other people think about us, it didn't good for all of us. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b1d5fb891259,36F89CC566E6,"If we are happy, surprice, angry, disgust, fear and sad other people can seen by looking at our face. But some people can control their felling so sometime it hard to know their expression. Sometime it is good to know how people think about us but sometime not knowing what other pwople thik about us better. Some people can't tell other people emotion by looking at their face. Most human communication doesn't have emotion. They talked to each other because they think they have to.
+
+Some people can know that the difference between a real smile and the forced smile. In real smile your muscles that begin at your cheek bones lift the coners of your mouth. In forced simle your muscles that begin at your cheek bones stretched sideways. If you are surprice you raises your eyebrows and if you are angry you tightens your lips ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c2996141689d,36F89CC566E6,School should not use this technology to the students because this technology is good but bad at the same time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d528b618214d,36F89CC566E6,Students didn't come to school happy everday. Sometime students come to school sometime they are not enought sleep so they don't want to study or they get angry easily. Some students have some teachers they didn't like so if the teachers know that their communication can't be good. Even if we don't use this technology most teachers can understand our expression by looking at our face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d95e0de29b68,3713AC622BFF,The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f772ca6e884c,3713AC622BFF,"despite Exploring Venus the Evening star,"" is the one of the brightest point of light in night sky, making it simple for even an amature stargazer to spot. Venu is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasinally the closet in distance too. they said the venus was the Earth twin it becasue Venus ans the earth was the closet planet in the hole planet on the space, and that why it the brightest point in the night sky; ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bfd0576f2ef7,3713AC622BFF,this is why it's not worthy pursuit despite the danger it present ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b7fae483fb66,3713AC622BFF,"On Page 2. it said "" No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explanin why not a single sapceship has touches down on venus in more than decades. Numerous factors cintribute to Venus's reputation as challenge planet for human to study, despite its proximity to us"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2e4b5245965c,3713AC622BFF,"Exploring Venus was despite the danger because On page 3. said "" Even more challenging are the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2fbf1f5899dc,3713AC622BFF,that why Venus is whorthy pursuit despite the dangers presents. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d39547c43831,375EFDE3B08A,The advances of limiting car usage is not only helping the communtity but also yourself ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5d5c6d7d5062,375EFDE3B08A,"In Vauban, Germany  70 percent of their families do not own cars, and 57 percent saold a car to live here. people find it better to walk to places rather than having to use a vehicle. ""All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,"" said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation America. The Environmental Protecton Agency is promothing ""car reduced"" communties. Delivery companies complained of lost revenus, while exceptions were made for plug-in cars. it was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,"" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. Two other Columbian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. In parks and sports centers their pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth, sidewalks. With all these changes, poeple who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit. New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyricketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, proposed partnering with the telecommunities industry to create cities in which ""pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources lower emissions and improve safety."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7c9fba394ef,377548575048,"It says that when Luke had to feed the animal he had to go when it was raining also and that he had to walk on a slippery ladder. Next he rode a cattle to Greece because he said it was a life time if he went. Then,the catlle boat trips were unbeliveable opportunity for a small town boy. Also,his second job was to take care of the animals every hour. For instance he couldnt work because his ribs wre crack. Then he rode to different countries. Its says Luke always found time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Then it says,but being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke it opend the world to him. Its also explains he has to take care of horses cows and mules that were shipped overseas. Next it helps countries recover their food supplies,animals and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA.For instance he knew it was an opportunity of life time. Luke and don signed up for it. don invited him to Europe and they had to ride a cattle. They also went to New Orleans for orders. He said it prepared him for work because he had things to take care of something. He said it opened the world to him. Then he said he went to different countries all over the world he got different jobs also. Thats how he convine others. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d048e06937e,37A7110DB0C7,Nearly over 78% of students participate in after school or extracurricular activities in the US as of today. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+70b35be30ae2,37A7110DB0C7,"While it is important for a young adolescent to become involved in some form of an extracurricular, to make something of the such mandatory is unneeded and inconvenient for many. ",Position,Effective,,,
+168fad0012b3,37A7110DB0C7,Taking part in a extra activities requires many resources which some people can't afford or simply don't have. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9af53070a1d9,37A7110DB0C7,"For a student to become apart of something, it should be at their own free will and not because someone of higher status makes it not optional. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+58508ceed692,37A7110DB0C7,"time consumption, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d21c282ccc72,37A7110DB0C7,student transportation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c70fa81b00cd,37A7110DB0C7,student's overall mental health and happiness. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f271b64e6058,37A7110DB0C7,"For those who are on the free or reduced lunch plan, it's even more likely that they wont be able to place their child into an extracurricular due to costs. Activities such as sports, dance, theater, and clubs cost money, something many don't have much of. Whether it's to simply enroll your child in the sport, to pay for dance shoes, or to buy supplies it always comes down to some sort of price. Even if a family is not struggling with funding, many see it as unnecessary to spend money on something their child truly doesn't wish to participate in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56355eab71cc,37A7110DB0C7,It isn't uncommon for students who live in larger families with younger siblings to watch after the younger children. Many students who are apart of extracurricular often don't have this job nor need to be home earlier due to this reason ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12440e810238,37A7110DB0C7,"When students are forced to spend their free time at a practice or rehearsal, this creates conflict within the household dynamic. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9ba70801b41d,37A7110DB0C7,"Without the children there to watch after their younger siblings or to perform everyday chores such as cleaning up after the house or tending to a farm if the student were to live in the more rural areas, it causes the family to have to search for daycare or hire an extra hand which is not only costly but also stressful. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a8fda6d708f,37A7110DB0C7,transportation is also a main concern ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4f2346647af,37A7110DB0C7,"Many parents or legal guardians travel and work for several hours, often getting home late. If children are at extracurricular while their parents work, this means there is no one who is available to pick them up or provide transportation to such activity or back home. While carpooling or busing may be an option in specific areas, this does not apply to students who do not have access to said buses or who live in extremely rural areas, further from the school or activity site. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+817e05d34434,37A7110DB0C7,Joining an outside group or involving yourself in a social setting where one participates in a hobby may be healthy and is encouraged ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+55804cc6a979,37A7110DB0C7,just because it is pushed for does not mean it should be mandatory. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+579e88ae7f70,37A7110DB0C7,"The decision to devote ones time, money, and effort to such a consuming thing should be a personal and willing choice. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2a0d8e40f985,37A7110DB0C7,"Forcing a student to become apart of the student counsel or to play a sport may seem like the healthy option and makes them involved in something, but sometimes this can be damaging to a student. If the child is unhappy with what they've been put into, and are forced to participate in this activity several times a week, it's bound to create some form of an issue with the student over time. It can cause depression or irritation, with one being forced into something that doesn't truly bring them joy which may both effect the students personal life and scholastic performance. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f631e2dd6c9f,37A7110DB0C7,"Becoming apart of an extracurricular activity should be a free willing, and personal choice that fits for both students and their families. This should revolve around the students wishes and not those of someone who does not know each child's personal situation. Forcing one into something they did not choose for themselves has very few positive effects and is bound to do more harm than good for each individual and their families. Enlisting each and every child into activities outside of school causes too many conflicts with time, money, transportation, and a student's overall well being. Although it's encouraged to participate in an extracurricular, it should not be made mandatory for students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bf1f2cfae511,37D7B6975F21,In this article the author thinks that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. And he has many reasons for thinking and suggesting it and here the way that he says that it would be worthy of pursuit is by putting facts that would be helpful in the article. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9e62e1b1ab32,37D7B6975F21,Some of the advantages that the article would have is that it is very well informed and it have a lot of evidence that we could use to say that it is a study that is worthy of pursuit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+576216b70b74,37D7B6975F21,In the articleit says´Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionaly the closest in distance to´.This is saying that venus is closer to us and we have more adantage of knowing more about it because more people can go on it since it is closer. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+517e80013db4,37D7B6975F21,It also says that ´Numerous factors contribute to venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study despite its proximity to us. which also means ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01b1aadbfc5e,37D7B6975F21,that it could also be difficult to pursuit worthy on venus because it could be difficult to study. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+660fd43aa032,37D7B6975F21,Thats is why he says we should pursuit worthy to venus but there are also some disadantages I think that either way there are more facts about pursuing it but not all might think the same. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+93a0404f6c19,37FC9DB2D1DB,"When assigned a project during summer break, don't you wish you could have control? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7ad7f10f50af,37FC9DB2D1DB,Students should be able to design their own projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d53fa254177c,37FC9DB2D1DB,it's their summer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+efa8b27936f3,37FC9DB2D1DB,"improve learning, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+627bdf186c4a,37FC9DB2D1DB,students can be creative with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44066cff14cc,37FC9DB2D1DB,"When making a project these things are what you look forward too. Students need their minds to go wild and enjoy the project especially if it's over the summer. Their summer to be specific because no student would want to stay at home stuck doing a project if it's not fun for them. Especially if their friends are out having fun. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fb01a8a829a,37FC9DB2D1DB,it's their summer. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd107739df2e,37FC9DB2D1DB,"No student, in any grade, would want to be stuck with a project to do over their summer break or any break. Students dont even want homework over any type of brake. Therefor they should be able to design their projects. This should give them a little more freedom over break instead of being bored overall. It could help students have fun while doing their project as well as getting a good grade. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4df60b8e1323,37FC9DB2D1DB,when doing a project it could help with bonding. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b1e1d92579d,37FC9DB2D1DB,"This could work in one of two ways: The first being a family project and students get to do a family tree. And second being a group project and friends stay over each others houses and get to know each other more. In benefit of all this is making a new friend or friends. And a bonus is getting a good grade. Summer's are supposed to be spent with family and friends. Enabling students to design their own projects can open up so many new worlds. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be2207e9aaf8,37FC9DB2D1DB,allowing students to design their projects will improve creativity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+385ea5a76edc,37FC9DB2D1DB,"What students look forward to in a project is how fun it could be or how much fun could they could get out of it. So allowing students to design their projects can help improve not only creativity but learning. Students want to go all out and when they get to see that opportunity it's amazing what students can do. It's overall amazing what is in a students mind, they just need to let it all out. This also helps them as they arent pressured to stay in the standards of the project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+354b438465f9,37FC9DB2D1DB,"The only bad side anyone can possibly see in this is the topic. Students, when let lose, can tend to get off topic and not realize it. They get to caught up in their mind that they lose what the requirements are. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d14a46bff33a,37FC9DB2D1DB,This isn't a bad thing but it tends to happen. Overall students want to have fun with learning. It's already boring enough to do homework so cut the students some slack. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fad33fed6369,37FC9DB2D1DB,"students should be able to design their own projects. Its not only their summer but their time with family. It could help bonding with not only family but with some new friends, and it could make summer a lot more fun. And also improve creativity as all students want to let their minds free when making a project. They want to see how much they could get out of something so making students design their projects is the best way to go. Let their mind flow and enjoy not only their project but summer as well.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d3eae8034498,384D9E9B4369,Making Mona Lisa smile people are feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotions. The new software has developed that improves accury in the perceiving the emotins of others. This means that people are hiding their emotion so that people can't tell how they are feeling inside their hearts. Accoriding to some new computer software that can help to recognize emotion inside aperson. This can help people to know what they are going throw in there emotions. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5ef819e488d1,384D9E9B4369,I agree with what they are making for new software that recognize emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e01c0ff4c04a,384D9E9B4369,We can actully calcute emotions like math. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+93a27d538a98,384D9E9B4369,"To recognize the subtle fical movement because we humans use to express how we feel. The mojor for the process is to know how you can track these facial movement. This can help you to understand that emotion is rate of how your feeling are. This mean That you can hide your feeling from your friends but how your phisical can show how by the look on your face that you are happy ,sad or worried of something. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab3fb41f1071,384D9E9B4369,Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatony to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80f5bcded173,384D9E9B4369,Thia means that da Vinci helped people to paint different look of emotion and feeling on the paint that they had made. The new software store simlar to rate the informations. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b7fd51840c7f,384D9E9B4369,"To bring smile to your fae, while it's show just how much this computer can do. This mean the image on computer can make you happy,sad,smile and anger. It appers on your screen a similar ad might follow. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+056d0cf08ae4,384D9E9B4369,Using new techonology it can help student in calss to undersstand how world is bringing new things that can help millinons of people to recognize their emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5f7cbd1217e,384D9E9B4369,"It can make huge change for people who had problems of knowing their feelong or emotions. BY the way making a happy face in expriment also make you feel slightly happy. It may happen because we unconsiously imitate another person's ficial expressions. Making happy face caould reveal so much about the since of emotions. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0dc17f79691,384D9E9B4369,This explain how people can know how new software works. The software rate your feeling which can bring change in the real life from children and alduts. In fact these instructions for face that looks happy. It's all bout those muscular action. That can indicate the different between a genuine smile and force one. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5ca45490fa74,3869028BB079,"Through the school year students are required complete many learning based projects that are designed and instructed by teachers, but as the school year ends many teachers fear that students may lose the knowledge gained over the year during summer break. To prevent this from happening many schools require summer projects that reinforce knowledge learned during the school year ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b0732090b707,3869028BB079,"Many people argue if a teacher or student designed projects are more effective to help retain knowledge, but student designed projects are believed to be more effective. ",Position,Effective,,,
+53badb80e093,3869028BB079,"When a summer project is designed by a student it gives students a chance not only learn while completing the project, but to learn while making it ",Claim,Effective,,,
+afccc765ae14,3869028BB079,"students receive a real world experience, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+833d8a79068b,3869028BB079,students experience a sense of freedom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f8fe9840ff6e,3869028BB079,"During summer many students have the desire to quickly complete the assignment a teacher has assigned, by doing the bare minimum, but if the project was designed by the student themselves it would give them the opportunity to learn while both making and completing the project. When you develop a project, a lot of research is need to be conducted, this gives students an opportunity to absorb more information, then if they were just completing a project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3a06cf5353cb,3869028BB079,"Designing a project also gives students knowledge in the topic their project is on, as well as skills on how to make projects and other important research based skills that are not focused on in school, but are necessary in higher level education. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c3b607fc3889,3869028BB079,"Not only do student designed projects give students an extra opportunity to learn, but it also provides students with a sense of real world experiences that enhance learning, and general skills. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+80a59defa723,3869028BB079,"After high school graduation many colleges and universities require that students conduct research projects designed by themselves, in order to receive a degree. This may be very difficult for students coming from an environment were teachers design everything, but a student developed projects in school would give kids an experiences in this situation helping them latter in life, and making college projects easier to complete. Also, in many work environments employees are left on their own to complete tasks and projects, and an experience in designing your own project during school years would help people develop necessary skills for an post- graduation career, as well as high school or college jobs. This experience would also gives students something to put under leadership on a college application. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+60b37e0d4eda,3869028BB079,"Another essential impact of allowing students to design their own projects during summer, is that this allows students to develop a senses of freedom that is locked up during the long school year ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f577329d33f6,3869028BB079,"Throughout the school year teachers provide projects that are essential for learning the content, but prevents students form using there creativity and expanding on their freedom to think in different ways. During the summer if students were allowed to develop their own projects they would feel more free, this would allow them to experiment with different ideas and concepts, this also would allow them to figure out which way they learn best. While being away from an instructor such as a teacher, kids could use their own ideas to create a project, that is not influenced by others, and this would show schools and teacher how much a student truly understands not just the knowledge that a teacher is forcing upon them. A sense of freedom is also important for preparing students for their next step in life, whether it is a higher education level, or a career, because, it is important students get an experience learning by themselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9baa1a769622,3869028BB079,"Summer break projects are one of the essential tools in preventing students form losing the knowledge that they difficulty gained throughout the year, and student designed projects provide a more effective alternative to the rigid teacher designed projects ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a701efe7ab5,3869028BB079,"Many people may argue that teacher designed projects are the most educational and effective way to help students retain their knowledge, because they are made by experts in the subject, and are designed by adults, or that allowing students to develop their own projects is a waste of time, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3156f08ee47a,3869028BB079,"but teacher designed projects prevent students from acquiring real world experiences, freedom, and an extra learning experiences that a student designed project would provide. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+324fc41a3fc0,3869028BB079,Summer break projects may be helpful in allowing students to learn but people will only receive the most out of this if they are designed by a student. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3ee096053480,387FEC6C2CB7,The Facial Action Coding System is useful in many ways when telling us someones facial expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1a2eb97d1f7b,387FEC6C2CB7,The Facial Action Ciding System can help us indicate someones true fellings or emoions that they are felling or felling that they have torwds someone else. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f38ec7062e1f,387FEC6C2CB7,By looking at A computer it can indicate what your truely felling. When someone doesnt have A facial expression on thier face the Facial Action Coding System can identify what they are truely felling. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00ec265a4f77,387FEC6C2CB7,Making A facial expression everyday can help you produce the expression more often. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ca337dbf0e88,387FEC6C2CB7,"Most the time whatever emotion your felling the more this emotion will pop up in your life time. Most emotions can be detected based on your facial expression or the way you move or speak. If your around someone who is always smiling chances are you will be happy to. Based on someones else emotion you can sometimes fell the pearsons happiness, sadness, or anger torwds themself, or someone else. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+421d704fd9b0,38EB926DE7F0,The author supports this idea by giving the facts of how dangerous it is but why we should keep trying to study Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6808c31d8fa4,38EB926DE7F0,The author says a lot about the dangers because there are a lot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4cc7b815ca8,38EB926DE7F0,we could find out more about these dangers and how to defeat them. They set out on a mission to simulate the chaos of Venus's surface and it was able to last three weeks. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b017dd46b24,38EB926DE7F0,NASA is working on a lot of different approaches on how to last a while or have a good landing on Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b6f683577193,38EB926DE7F0,The author tells about the things that we could find out if we could be there for a while. They stress a lot in the passage about it being the hottest planet around and it isn't even the closest to the sun. This is a huge thing holding them back the author says and would melt almost all metal. The author supports this by saying that a submarine that goes very deep in the ocean wouldn't even survive on Venus. The author gives a lot of facts and things to support his claims. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d43ae55a3546,38EB926DE7F0,If the author has told a fact they have had soemthing to support it. The author says a lot about the things we can't do with Venus and has something to explain why with it. The author had a lot of facts and examples to help him support his and NASA's facts and ideas. I really like that the author will also give statistics because that is a huge way to support a fact or claim. Overall in this whole passage the author supports all ideas. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+979be1d4bcbf,38F506B031E1,Facial Action Coding System I think is a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+280cb078f9e1,38F506B031E1,because if someone is trying to figure out how you are feeling and you don't tell them they can look on the computer and tell what your emotions are ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bb1674bb3e3,38F506B031E1,". In the passage it tells that the computer is 3-D and has 44 major muscle. This tell us that if a friend is feeling a way you can tell and you would actually know itts true and not false. In paragraph one it explains to me that there are six basic emotions and they are happiness, surprise , anger ,and ect. For example your frontalis muscle above your eye raises your eyebrows when you are surprise. Some people wouldnt think that this is possible but I think its something good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cc385a3b9bd,38F506B031E1,When a student is looking at the computer they can pick up all emotions like if you have mixed emotions or just one. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fecd321a7589,38F506B031E1,Someimes teachers want to know how they students are feeling but just don't want to walk up to the and just ask. This computer I think was a wonderful thing that someone can make. If I ever had this computer it would be very useful to me because want to know how others feel. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+17c78d2ac318,38F506B031E1,Some people who try to just look at someone and tell how they are feelings is not always helpful they might think its one thing but its another. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+360430e9b2b6,38F506B031E1,Most people are not just good by going off someone's look but this computer can help out alot you don't need to try and guess what that person is feeling. Evan when some artist are trying to draw a ppersons emotion they don't always know either they would also need the computer . Dr. Huang says in te story that Da Vinci has and comuter when he draw so that he could get the specific factial expression. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+627d56a525ad,38F506B031E1,If I was to get one of these computes i would like to use it on everyone around me because I love to see people happy and if they are not I would like to make there day. If I am taking a test and I get confused I know that the computers see that and the teacher would know and try to help me out a little. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9ffc370954c,38F506B031E1,Using these can help everyone out in so many differen ways. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16666c0dbb61,38F506B031E1,Eveyone should have one of these or get an computer lie this one. If you really need to know about smeone you just would look on it to see what it is. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+41b5abbc3c7e,38F506B031E1,This would be good when a school have a play and the people that are watching them need or want to figure out how the characters feel. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c9faafec8062,392CC0403D93,"Now a days in VAUBAN, Germany people living in these lovely suburbs are living without automobiles. This area specifically is now known as a car free zone, all except for a main tram that runs from Vauban to downtown Freiburg. Although there arent any cars running on the streets doesnt mean ownership isnt allowed, you are allowed to own a vehicle, granted you park it in 1 of 2 spots. Either a 40,000 dollar registered parking garage, or at home in your garage. Vauban is known to have 70 percent of people without cars and 57 percent sold their cars to live in Vauban. Someone by the name of Heidrun Walter, a media trainor stated ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.""
+
+Now a days people roaming the streets are moving around Vauban in three different ways, Walking, biking or the city tram. Though these arent as fast and convienient as cars they still are transportation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc1a910cec00,392CC0403D93,"Life for many people in Vauban is great because its the relief of no polution, the crashes and killings of pedestrians decreased greatly and just all in all less money wasted on gas. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+47a85e95adc7,392CC0403D93,"Suburbs are used to great numbers of vehicles, just look at Chicago or Shanghai. A suburb is a place where many middle class families settle down and buy homes to live in. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5fda565874fc,392CC0403D93,This being said cars help greatly reduce the gas fumes in greenhouses when they are banned and not being used ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fc3a7c5477cf,392CC0403D93,Just a slight percentage of 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe alone and greatly increased to 50 percent in the United States. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+06f50a3676a7,392CC0403D93,"
+Vauban, home to 5,500 residents is very small due to the no car zone, what people dont know is within this city is closely compacted stores (walking distance for short travel) and other buildings. Most of the development since World War II is the basic structure of a car, focusing on a car was the biggest development of history, but a man named David Goldberg said ""That will have to change.""
+
+Paris bans driving due to smog
+
+Many days of pollution caused Paris to form a partial driving ban to help maintain air pollution. Not only that Paris ordered many motorists to leave there cars or be forced to pay a large fine of 22- euros or $31. Many did what was said and many did not, if they werent cooperating they would pay the fine and have the vehicle impounded.
+
+Most of frances pollution came from the favored diesel, they had a tax policy that supported diesel instead of gasoline. Due to the favoring of Diesel making up 67 percent of the vehicle gas consumption.
+
+France earned many complaints from companies world wide, delivery companies especially. They complained over lost revenue. Thats not all, because of this complaint France had to make a couple exceptions like Electric, hybrid vehicles and a Fee as free as a bird for the transit (Friday through Monday).
+
+Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota
+
+Bogota, Columbia - On a day like no other the people of Columbia set aside there Colorful vehicles to do a more enviromental favor. They rode Bicycles, hiked, skated or even took a bus to work to free Columbia of traffic jams and pollution.
+
+This has began to influence other countries into believing you dont need a vehicle to get around, it helped them realize a different meaning in transportation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd91f604fdec,392CC0403D93,This banned vehicles and helped reduce smog. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5d540f20d17b,392CC0403D93,"Though the rain comes down constantly on Bogota it hasnt stopped them from participating in this event, the people of Bogota state ""it helps relieve stress and lower air polution I like it.""
+
+Cali and Valledupar, two other columbian countries also decreased vehicle use. Many authorities from seperate countries took a boat or plane to visit Bogota to see the event and were quite enthusiastic. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dfb52f73adda,392CC0403D93,"Studies in America state due to Obama's goal to lower greenhouse gas emissions is so fortuitous people of america are purchasing less vehicles, driving less and getting fewer licenses.
+
+The United States being the worlds largest population of driving is coming to an end. The United States is so large in the driving industry because of The making of the Model T, and the immortalization of ""Mustang Sally."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+822f2b7223ea,392CC0403D93,Getting rid of the transportation which sociologists think will happen isnt going to get rid of all the gas emission due to power plants. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70a8ff0cd9d4,392CC0403D93,New Yorks bike sharing policy and a Toll on bridges has greatly decreased driving in it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+126ec8ba17ca,392CC0403D93,"This all shows exact evidence of how the earth is trying to better themselves to get rid of pollution. Not because they are getting rid of cars, but because they are getting rid of cars and keeping people happy ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+96e12435da6f,392CC0403D93,"Just remember, just because your forced to stop using a car doesnt mean you should give up and quit, just see it as a change in your life and a relief you are helping to make on earth.    ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+5ca135166d84,392F93BC6499,"The ""Evening Star"" or otherwise known as Venus is a very dangerous planet. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+290deee90061,392F93BC6499,"Despite the planet being close to us, we haven't sent any spacecrafts there in the past 30 years. The reason has alot to do with the fact that a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide covers Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere.
+
+On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, which means that its alot of times hotter than the surface of our planet. The atmospheric pressure is also 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Also Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5892c135699c,392F93BC6499,"With all that being said, why would we want to go back there. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+19c768b350fb,392F93BC6499,"The reason is because Astronomers think that the Venus was once an earth like planet. They believe that Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Adding more into this is that today, Venus has some features such as mountains and valleys. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+086274e9b086,392F93BC6499,"NASA has come up with an idea on how they would live in
+
+Venus safely and productive. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7afa81033d27,392F93BC6499,"The idea is to allow scientist to float above ground. About 30 miles to be exact. With them hovering 30 miles above ground they should be safe from the ground conditions. With that, NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus; such as an device that was used in World War 2 that calculates under high pressure of heat and does not require electricity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8810c8c8cf09,392F93BC6499,I love the idea of going back to Venus and exploring because we are humans and we have an unlimited imagination. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6e4b18a5f824,392F93BC6499,"If we want to truly be a civilization, We should be at least a two planet species. Innovating and learning is how we got here. 100 years ago we made the first car. Imagine what life wil be like in 100 years. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+65fc26269012,396A37B6D921,"They say the facial expressions for each emotion are universal because even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression, the new emotion are facial movements for example the painted face from the Mona Lisa, we can identify a lot emotions as Vinci's masterpiece. Each expression is a neutral face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy,worried,sad,etc. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d7f6561abd1,396A37B6D921,"imaginate if the computer know when your happy or sad, that well be so cool ",Position,Adequate,,,
+52649deccd9a,396A37B6D921,then you know if someone is sad and you can help him or you can know if this person is happy and he make you happy two ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd47f7c8370d,396A37B6D921,the can be great to create new stuff like videogame tv show and all kinda things ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8231e1c0b5e,396A37B6D921,"most human comunication is nonverbal, including emotionalcomunication, so that mean the computers have to understand that too, sometimes not only moving your facial muscles make make you express your emotion but that maybe make you feel them,making that can reveal sabout the science of the emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a2a4789aa50,399030918355,Please come join the Seagoing Cowboys program! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5a29969f7b45,399030918355,You can tour the world while helping other countries! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+85097d14a5b8,399030918355,"'It is the most adventrous, exciting job you can possibly get, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ada3fc19c9bf,399030918355,"I was 18 before arriving in Greece,but I was heading to Greece with 335 horses, and loads of hay and oats to feed the horses with ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0485e5a05b00,399030918355,"I told them about giving out horses in Greece, and the time I toured other incredible sites like an excavated caslte in Crete. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efd9b5676379,399030918355,"After being out of breath from persuading them to sign up, I thought that it was worth being out of breath. Now Don Reist and I have twenty extra helpers for our future trips to spots all over the world, and new friends to tell stories with. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f01bb11d5c7,39AF0292F9B3,"Schools are places where kids end up spending the majority of their childhood in. Most kids end up disliking school for one reason or another, while others might love school. To have the ability to know how a child is feeling and map their patters can become useful in more ways than one. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a4086854e840,39AF0292F9B3,The use of reading a students emotions is valuable in many ways ,Position,Effective,,,
+4fc14910397a,39AF0292F9B3,helping with possible depression ,Claim,Effective,,,
+85f45b245fd0,39AF0292F9B3,enhancing the material ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ae3aae8e97a4,39AF0292F9B3,creating a better enviroment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fd08c7ebf869,39AF0292F9B3,"School can be a stressful time for many students and also a time of growth. Especially in high school and even middle school, the childs body is going through puberty. This chemical change in the body can lead to mood swings and other issues especially when school stress is added on top. This technology is capable of indicating ""...the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one""(paragraph 7). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e947c266cdf3,39AF0292F9B3,With the aid of this technology the school can help students before they develope mental illnesses like depression that often go unseen due to hiding true emotion. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d466b2ca2efb,39AF0292F9B3,"Also, in many schools students usually find the learning material to be sub par or boring in many cases. However with the aid of this technology ""a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"" (paragraph 6). If a teacher was able to pin point when exactly a lesson becomes boring it would majorly help with being able to reconstruct it as well ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4ab1af791df,39AF0292F9B3,"For difficult classes being able to know when the students are lost would help significantly in increasing the understanding of the material as teachers will be able to know exactly what the students dont understand, and thus be able to help them achieve better grades. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+6695c2d175a7,39AF0292F9B3,Being able to understand students emotions in a learning enviroment can also help with improving the school overall. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d575e8eaf2b2,39AF0292F9B3,"SInce the technology would be able to understand the basic emotions like ""...happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness"" (paragraph 3), this can give a school tons of feedback on how to improve. For example, with negative emotions, a school would be able to improve its cafeteria food quality from knowing what foods are highly unpopular, and as a result save food from wasting. Or during school events, even though the event might be a success knowing how each of the students felt about the event would help with improving it for next year. The addition of this technology would allow a school to be the best the possibly could. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c6c3c36b8c63,39AF0292F9B3,"The addition of this facial technology can be quite revolutionary in a school setting. As students often dont share their true feelings, issues can be confronted and the students mentality can be improved. Also a better, and positive learning enviroment can be created. The ability to remove student confusion and make learning interesting would go a long way in helping not only the students grow and move forward positivly, but also the school as a whole. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e0a0d54aee6d,39BA457D842C,Venus may have some dangers ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9d0db0441b71,39BA457D842C,The author think's venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+63985d07bc7f,39BA457D842C,Here are some things you should know about Venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9cc00caea054,39BA457D842C,"Venus may be called "" Evening Star "". The Evening star is one of the brightest point of light in the sky. Even though Venus is called a Star it's actually a planet. Venus is the secound planet from the sun.
+
+It being close to the sun makes it hard to examine closely. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8d7cd136685,39BA457D842C,Venus may be very challenging to get around or to beable to find more out about ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+685ec865fb0f,39BA457D842C,"Venus is the closest to the earth. Venus is like a cloud-draped world. One of the dangers of Venus is it being cloud-draped because humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus. No spacecraft lasted the landing more than a few hour if that. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e68689855e1c,39BA457D842C,A reason Venus is a dangerous place is the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9adf081c208a,39BA457D842C,"Venus has challenging clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we feel on our own planet. How we know this informaiton can help understand that the author thinks venus has some dangers on it. For example , "" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth ; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. "" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a257b6f65dd,39BA457D842C,Venus would be a worthy pursuit depite the dangers because Venus was once the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d1c8cf4c397,39BA457D842C,"Venus used to be covered with largely oceans and may have supported various forms of life. To this day Venus has some features that are analogous to those on earth. Venus surface is a rocky sediment. Venus also has some familiar features such as valleys , moutains and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d47dac0905fa,39BA457D842C,This concludes how the author think's that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus may be harmful to humans but at one point Venus was just like our home. Venus once has forms of life like we do today on planet earth. Venus might be something interesting but the danger's is what keep's us from landing. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9ad96fa7ca65,3A23BC10DD8C,I am going to tell you the reasons Luke joined the program ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c14f78b6bc29,3A23BC10DD8C,"One is ""he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e7f851fe8d6,3A23BC10DD8C,"""luke also found time to have fun on board. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca923486d048,3A23BC10DD8C,a great opportunity of a lifetime to join the program. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc323bdc0716,3A23BC10DD8C,"Well my first reason is Luke bomberger had no idea that his life would change soon after his high school graduation. second is But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger it opened up the world to him. One more reason is that he said""I'm grateful for the opportunity""he says. Both of thoses reasons suport why he thought it was a great opportunity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e9cfd4fa528,3A23BC10DD8C,he also found time to have fun on board especally on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a27fdb9b374,3A23BC10DD8C,"One peice of evidence is ""Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped pass the time"". My second peice of evidence is ""Luke also toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d92b00af25cb,3A23BC10DD8C,both of thoses statemeants help me answer question. Which is why he joined the program. Both of my reasons were it was great opportunity of a lifetime and Luke was also able to have freetime found time to have fun on board. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a4deffbf9f4a,3A40FAC3D585,The face is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b49afbd276cf,3A40FAC3D585,nobody lives on Mars it's just a empty planet. They NASA says that the face on Mars had became a pop icon but i don't think that just because NASA has images that it's ture. You can't always believe people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+083e1ecae1db,3A40FAC3D585,"Although few scientists believed the Face wan an alien artifact, Some People think the Face is bona fide evidenve og life on Mars. Evidence that NASA would rathr hide, lets say conspiracy theorists. The caption noted that the rock formation resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. This would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+52150c6abb12,3A40FAC3D585,"Many people thought that is was an alien momument, but on April 5, 1998 Mars Globsl Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. A Man named Micheal Malin and his Mars Oribter Camera team wanted to prove that there were no aliens. Him and his team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bde6c3ba2202,3A40FAC3D585,People should have been satisfied with knowing that there wasn't an alien monument after all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6728de44be8d,3A40FAC3D585,"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor drew closer for a second look. They has to rool the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view to get the picture. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras mamimum resolution. In the 2001 image each pixel span 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the 2976 Viking original. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dbeb940a5bec,3A40FAC3D585,"I think that the researchers shouldn't be having to look seversl times just to prove certain people wrong. If they don't believe then they need to go to Mars for themselves. It'd great that they got the comparsion but they went through trouble to get there. It was not an easy target. In face, it's hard work. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+69323ddbbf11,3A46013B0369,"Today many people are using technology for many reasons but there is one piece of technology that has been used a lot more recently. The smartphone or mobile phone, many people think that it is not that dangerous but it is as dangerous as most things that can damage or hurt people just not as much. As it can hurt people in many ways the most severe way is to be in a car accident just by looking at a phone for even a second. Not only could that person hurt themself but whomever else is in the car or the person they have crashed into. If it is such a bad way to drive why don't people stop looking at their phones while driving? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+075ee118c0cd,3A46013B0369,Well many people are worried about how their social status is doing and how their friend's day is rather than their safety. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+049b7521f4c7,3A46013B0369,So even if the majority of people were to stop there would always be that other percent who don't care. Although drivers should not they would still need their phones for GPS. Many states already have this situation classified as illegal but some states do not. Even if they were to turn the sound some people may not know where 1/2 miles to turn is. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+929b9bda9fa0,3A46013B0369,"
+There are consequences to driving with a person on his or her phone but in some states they should not even if there should be. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+69ea7777a173,3A46013B0369,It should be illegal to drive using their phones. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cc5cb4f00732,3A46013B0369,People who drive with phones should get a ticket and they should have to pay the fine or they would get jail time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba1b6b597904,3A46013B0369,"Many people do not realise just how dangerous not looking at their surroundings are when driving a car. People have to worry about cars coming or going or when they have to stop, go or even yield. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd5ab88179b7,3A46013B0369,It is known that when drivers get on the road there is a risk of crashing by the car or the person's actions so why make that percentage higher. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e13deac1b17,3A46013B0369,"Also risk not only themselves but other people.
+
+It is just not right and not fair for other people they could have potentially hurt or damage their possessions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+876dcc453d57,3A46013B0369,Cell Phones carry A lot of information like the weather or the news and mainly social media. What someone is doing or how they are doing are important to their friends. Many people would agree that these reasons cause them to look at their cell phones ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1d7fc52afc8,3A46013B0369,"
+And would convince other people to stop or text them before they drive to say that they are not going to be responding while they drive. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+65cde62e43f8,3A46013B0369,Many people drive while using their cellular devices and it causes problems for many people. It is illegal in some states and some in not but even in the illegal states people still do it knowing they could cause damage to someone or themselves or even pay a fine. It should be illegal anywhere so people can think about whether or not they want to get a ticket. People should stop to think that they may make someone's day worse. People should just stop using their phones while driving in general but not everyone chooses to do it.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8710a706575b,3A7412AECF21,"The use of tecnology reading your face is a bad idale for some things but not all things. Emotions are what humans have. The Facial coding system enables computer to read face exspreshions like happy ,sad,frown,fear,disgust,anger,and suprise ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3bb6376aeff4,3A7412AECF21,The Coding system should not be on every ones computer becuse some people hate adds and the system would just keep showing diffent ones each time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad85f78b066f,3A7412AECF21,On the Facial Action Coding System would not be bad if you could shut it off and on other then it being on non stop all day tring to read your face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7869b7d9db9,3A7412AECF21,The program would be alsome to look at old pitures to see if they were happy or what not ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e950840d51b,3A7412AECF21,the program makes a 3-D face that has all 44 major muscles in the model . It has to move like a human face dose. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5ba0b9e453df,3A7412AECF21,The Facial Action Coding Systm would be cool if the creater could make it read other creachers like cat or a dog for we could see how they feel ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21ee51da5437,3A7412AECF21,"cats wag there tail but my cat is happy when he wags his tail what dose that mean than?
+
+My dog growls when he vplays what dose it mean? Maby later on they can move on from human faces to other animal faces. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4f84df0aab5,3A7412AECF21,"Dr. Paul Eckter man has alot of good idals with his program. He just needs it were the people can turn it on and off othere than being on all the time. like how when some people are angry they turn tv on or funny videos. That could turnout to becume disaster. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e587123028c5,3A7412AECF21,The Facial Action Coding System is a good idal for school work for if the student would get bord it could change there studing ways up or class room asiments. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1f454b32a9a,3A7412AECF21,"The program could read diffent shown emotions in the program. In fact us human perform the same impresive caculation every day.
+
+The ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" was neat to see what the program had to say. The Facial Action Coding System read the Mona Lisa painting and it said she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful,and 2 percent angry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+23ab9bce5a87,3A7412AECF21,The Facial Acting Coding System is a great program and in time it could read how humans feel and animals in the future. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+835d67db4a70,3A7412AECF21,"I think it will be a great program for computer to have. As long as you can turn them on and off at times. It would be a good way to get rid of adds.
+
+Dr. Huang thinks that Da Vinci studied human anatomy to help him paint facial muscles precisly enough to coney specific emotions. The program would help the police with criminals becuse it would read there face and tell them what going on . ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eea8df882fe5,3A748C1D650A,Do you think technology can read your emotion ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f55f2a3633db,3A748C1D650A,In my opinion I believe technology can't read your emotion ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+46cadf151f9f,3A748C1D650A,"First of all, emotion has to do with what you're thinking about ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c11e9f3de0c0,3A748C1D650A,a face can lie ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d8136cccef9,3A748C1D650A,and a drawing doesn't always mean it's happy when there is dark around it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da071a0651cb,3A748C1D650A,"First of all, when you try to see someone's emotion you don't really pay attention to their face you pay attention to how they act and how they talk ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a566f94b116c,3A748C1D650A,Someone can be hyper and talkative some days and the next they can be smiling but not hyper or talking to anybody. Kids come to school and put on a happy face when actually they don't want to be there. It's the same with everything else. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d29bdaee5da5,3A748C1D650A,"Secondly, a face can lie. Everyone has something they're thinking about but nobody knows exactly what they're thinking about. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aff2a97c8e42,3A748C1D650A,"Everyone hides their emotion a certain time in life; therefore, you can easily smile but it doesn't mean you're happy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b606f71a2c3e,3A748C1D650A,"Lastly, in the story the author talks about how they can also use the new technology they made to know the emotion of drawings like Mona Lisa. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f60c4827d4cf,3A748C1D650A,"When you look at the picture of Mona Lisa you see her smiling but the picture has to color and the smile does not look like a real smile, it looks like a fake smile. Also, in the picture of Mona Lisa the background is of a lonely lake or pond which is also without color. Color shows alot of emotion depending on the colors you use, like dark colors determine sadness and bright colors determine happiness but red is in between and usually determines hate; someone being angry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bf677170f78,3A748C1D650A,"In conclusion, technology can not read emotions. Emotion has to do with what is going on in your mind, facial expressions can easily lie, and emotion in drawings determine the colors of the the art.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e6906c095c88,3A777021089B,"Imagine this, you've had a long day as a student waking up early and working hard to do well in school all day, but then you remember you have Basketball practice tonight! This excites because you have become close friends with your teammates, and it serves as a nice break from everything going on in school. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+26b63bebece8,3A777021089B,Attending after school clubs and activities can give you a place where people with similar interests and hobbies all come together. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95055f2e26d7,3A777021089B,"After school clubs can be a safe space where you and your friends get together to do something you all enjoy, and you could make new friends along the way. Being in a club can provide a safe space, and the people there often share your interests. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+087e056a0720,3A777021089B,"Activities like these can make you an all rounded person while also giving you a break from school. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3b852a6f653b,3A777021089B,Activities from football to Rubiks cube club can create a safe space for the people on the team or in the club. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d4bad22b7fdb,3A777021089B,"What do I mean by ""safe space?""
+
+A safe space is where people can share how they feel, and why they feel that way. An example could be if you're on a football team your teammates become your friends and that gives you a whole community of people who care about you. It doesn't even have to be a team it could even be a group that likes horses, but they still have something in common to bond over. Teammates also tend to build you up, and give a boost in confidence which can help you be a stronger person. Did you know that having fun with your friends and participating in the activities you enjoy can even help you get into college? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+10735f34cfc6,3A777021089B,"I think that having students participate in an extracurricular activities could very beneficial for many different aspects of their development, such as social, emotional, and in some cases even physical. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7130cf7e8433,3A777021089B,"Most students are very focused on their academics and doing well to look good for college. What they might not know is colleges don't only look at grades they also look at your extracurricular s. Looking at what you did after school as well as in school helps hem see that you are able to juggle both things at once, but what they don't know is we actually enjoy it! Though it might seem like a lot especially with all of our school work, it could serve as the well deserved break we need. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+54270525879d,3A777021089B,"Students have a lot on their plates between school, homework, and studying, sometimes it's good to take a break ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6bb5351e8b55,3A777021089B,"What better way to relax then do something you enjoy with other people that enjoy it as well. Playing a sport after school can help you create close friends and teammates. When you think about stress reliving one of things you might think of is one of your favorite things to do with some of your friends. Well guess what, you just explained what a club is. In that portion of your day you don't have to worry about acing that test all you have to think about is swishing that three or winning that chess match. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+16612819f598,3A777021089B,"As a whole I think that after school activities could be beneficial to students in many ways. Many students might not fit in to friend groups, but with after school clubs they know they have similarities with their peers. It's a great way to relive stress with the people you care about while doing something you care about ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d5bbcf6d549f,3A777021089B,"That's why I think that having everyone participate in a club or sport could be very beneficial for these reasons, and I think it's a great addition to our school systems.   ",Position,Effective,,,
+257d02eb4ef8,3A88FA2C4060,"Did you know that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas  emission in europe and up to 50 percent in some intensive areas in the united states .there were 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile in the unitedstates,the enviorment  protection  agency is promiting ""car reduce"".
+
+communities and legislators are starting to act if cauiously in previous years80 percent of approiations have by law gone to high ways and only 20 percent to other transport. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7164afee185a,3A88FA2C4060,many thing consists of having a caer if you dont have a car you can hardly get around ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c5dd6fe46767,3A88FA2C4060,it would be very diffucult to do the thing you want to do! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7641a02ac715,3A88FA2C4060,"many people have cars for many reasons they have cars to get them around ,to and from work, and alot of other reasons .without a car many things will be very hard to accomplish. alot of things come with having a car you have to make sure its running right ,make sure all the tires are good , fix it if it need fixing ,and tend to it when it needs to be fix. cars come from many places all over the world thers car part that come from all over the world you just got t know your carb and when there is a problem! in this enviorment some people say cars are bad because of the gas that be in the air and that gas is expensive but without a car nothing is possible well i wouldnt say possible but it would be very hard to get around .now a days you need a car just to go around the coner and back!  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9add198e1383,3A98BE969D1F,"Ding, ding, ding. Thats the sound of a school bell at the end of the day. Over 500 kids rushing to their bus, but not one of them is staying after school. It's not that schools don't have after school it's that students just don't care or they don't know what's out there. In all my years of going to school I have all ways participated in after school activities, and every single one of them has helped me in some way, and that's why I think that students should participate in them ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d65bb7845a52,3A98BE969D1F,"Students should be required to participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council ",Position,Effective,,,
+0fe754368a9c,3A98BE969D1F,it helps them maintain grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f17567874bde,3A98BE969D1F,"gives students a chance to interact with other students, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f4e4d5db365,3A98BE969D1F,"they have a chance to give back to their school. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5cc53c0a864,3A98BE969D1F,Students that play sports have to maintain their grades when they'er off the field in order to play on the field. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0fed599419be,3A98BE969D1F,"This helps them to have a ""C"" or higher and they can apply what they learn on the field to when they'er off the field. A student in my class is always asking for his absent work because he has to leave early for one of his games. This student doesn't play just one sport but 3. So when he comes back the next day he has to make up all of his work if he wants to stay on the team. An example of applying what student learn on the field to off the field is my friend that plays football. He said to me ""I could never make a touch down if some one wasn't covering my blind side"",then he said, ""It's not about if
+
+I win because
+
+I would have never maid it if there was no one on the team to cover me."" Then the next day at his game he maid sure that the crowds were celebrating him and the team when they won. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea9802ea1381,3A98BE969D1F,"Year book gives students a chance to interact with other students by giving new students a chance to make friends, and it helps them find other students they can relate to. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dc1321fe246f,3A98BE969D1F,"In the 6th grade I was going to a new school, that I new nothing about and then club sign ups came, and I decided to sign up for year book. when I started out they gave me a camera and told me what kind of pictures they were looking for. When I went around the school and asked students if I could take their picture they were nice about it and said sure. Out of the 25 people I asked to take their picture 17 of them asked me if I wanted to be friends, and I said yes. Also the people in the year book club were new to the school just like me we talked about how we came to a new school and none of are friends came with us. Year book helped me find friends and find people who understood what I was going trough. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c7150f679ff,3A98BE969D1F,"Student council is a good way to give back to your school, by showing that they appreciate your school and to show school spirit ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e24bb52fa360,3A98BE969D1F,"Students on student council show that they appreciate their school when they represent them. For example when student council does a sock drive and then goes and distributes the socks to the less fortunate, they are showing how their school feels, and that they want to give back to the community we live in. When the students on student council show school spirit they go to the school sports games, show up for fund raisers, and set an example for how other students should act in school. By showing this appreciation and spirit they set the bar higher for other schools and show that they support our's. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a2e2c5f94f72,3A98BE969D1F,"Students should participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council because they will have good grades, a chance to interact with other students, and a way to give back to the community. Students will build character buy interacting with other students and have fun while doing it. Ding, ding, ding, thats the sound of the bell for after school. All the students flood into the hallways talking to each other about sports, year book, and student council. No student fells left out and every student has a friend. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+531aecb5b192,3AA63F8F7D47,Venus and Earth are very similiar ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+833a81b166b8,3AA63F8F7D47,somtimes Venus is just right around the corner from Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc241e317f6b,3AA63F8F7D47,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" supports the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because he provides sufficient evidence. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f9321105e55a,3AA63F8F7D47,Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because of the similarities with Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21eeb6c36be0,3AA63F8F7D47,"The Author explains that ""Today, Venus still some features that are analogous to those on Earth"" (4). Analogous means the outside has changed but the inside or function are similiar to that pf something else. If Venus still has valleys and mountains similiar to the of Earth then if we studied those features we could find out what happened to Venus decades ago. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91185976db83,3AA63F8F7D47,"The Author also states, ""Venus can somtimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit"" (4). ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed7b1b75942c,3AA63F8F7D47,"Launching space crafts to other planets is very expensive and even more so for a planet light year away, but if we can send space crafts to Venus when it is closest to us then it will Americans hundreds in tax dollars and we will learn a great deal from Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b18c6bf86356,3AA63F8F7D47,"In conclusion, Venus is worthy to be explored because there is so much we do not know about it yet and we could find something on that planet that we mever thought exsisted before.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37c05a8013e7,3AED5A7D58F8,What makes this a valueable tool to students? Can this tool be used on cell phones? Can we make this tool worldwide for all schools? what will the outcome of students emotional expressions if this tool is valuable? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d21f9961334a,3AED5A7D58F8,"What makes this a valuable tool to students? This would actually be wonderful tool in schools everywhere. A student can use this tool for many differnt reason in school. A student could have really big exam, test etc. the student may believe their ready. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7aff5d0fb3f,3AED5A7D58F8,this would system would detect if the student is really ready or not. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+efe644d2f83e,3AED5A7D58F8,"Instead of going to computer lad, waiting on your teacher. A good way to keep this system in route. It should be an app on your celluar device to use this tool. with this being on your cell phone,it makes it easier way for a stuidents that has a friend thats always in differnt moods. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02d4bf6bc9ec,3AED5A7D58F8,"With this tool we can detect that friends mood. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d969c5b3516,3AED5A7D58F8,"
+What will it take for this tool to make it worldwide? It will half to have many great response ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d3d5212bcacf,3AED5A7D58F8,This tool should be used many other places than schools. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5ebb40ee24a3,3AED5A7D58F8,"It will be awesom for police officers, doctors etc. Once one school has great feedback. It make other school try it out. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bcc110bd0f2,3AED5A7D58F8,The outcome of this system is wonderful. I done used this system over a millions times at school. It has actually worked great at othere school to. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+86230f5ad698,3AED5A7D58F8,Now we have a great way of dectecting someone else emotions. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+719a506233a6,3B10FD21BF95,Do you guys think that venus is dangers? Well for our part venus need to get up close and personal despite the risk or maybe they should think of them as challenges. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e4973642843c,3B10FD21BF95,Astronmers are fascinated by venus because it may once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+82866344115d,3B10FD21BF95,Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a51eaa96fba,3B10FD21BF95,"Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it had proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23b51e0e40d7,3B10FD21BF95,Venus would need to get uo close and personal despite the risk and maybe should think of them as challenges. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+dd0d27a561a5,3B10FD21BF95,Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in the solar system because people from long time had to covered the oceans to support carious forms of life to them just how earth is from us today. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1a5f47981d3,3B10FD21BF95,Also because the value of the returning of the venus seem to be a little difficult but there was other option to make a mission to be safe and productive to both of them for the astronomers to be by venus and know the planets in the solar system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81860bef0c8d,3B10FD21BF95,Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosvie sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere because they think that the challenging for venus might not be working for them but now they do work because the conditions are now more extreme then any human encounter out there and all of the environment can crush of a submarine ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c39bd95588c,3B10FD21BF95,"But then venus has the hottest surface temperature to any of the planet in the solar system that their is even when mercury is close to the sun venus can still be hot for the system being beside another planet. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ecb1e45c92c,3B10FD21BF95,"Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d095b55d89ad,3B10FD21BF95,"Venus can be the closest planet to earth even in terms of size and density. Also each of the previous mission can have an unmanned and for a reason no sacecraft has been survived for the time of landing for more than hours or even minutes. Venus had more than three decades, but venus reputation for a challenge planet is for humans to work on and study for and to despite the proximity to it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7aa81f9b21db,3B10FD21BF95,"This is what I think the author suggests to the study of venus because venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk and maybe should think of them for a challenge, because astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may once have been the most earth-like planet in the solar system, even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere, and venus is simple to see from the distant but can be safe vantage point in earth and has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely to it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+312f08ce7706,3B20A3B52316,"Life is a marathon not a sprint; therefore, people can not take breaks from educating themselves, even in the summer. However, long, boring, and useless summer project persuade students to avoid the project; forcing life's marathon to become a sprint. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3f07549b2101,3B20A3B52316,"Summer projects need a change and can be by students, ",Position,Effective,,,
+940a150ebd30,3B20A3B52316,"students know how long to make it, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a0109d10d202,3B20A3B52316,"how to make it interesting, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bc8a4a8ca9c7,3B20A3B52316,what it must include. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9d120b1e3675,3B20A3B52316,"Summer gives students a break from the long and hard work of the strenuous school year, therefore the stack of an eight page summer packet that may not be difficult, is enough to intimidate a student to cheat on it or simply not finish it. Student-summer-packet-designers understand the struggle and can make it a length at persuades the students to complete it on their own. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e72547190316,3B20A3B52316,Others might suggest that having fewer questions and less pages will just decrease a student's time spent learning or reviewing material. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b0ccfc839a47,3B20A3B52316,"However, the decrease in the amount of problems and page length will only urge students to complete the packet instead of copying. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e10c327c24ae,3B20A3B52316,"Summer is meant for students to take a break from the boring and uninteresting work of the school year, therefore, the dull material in a summer packet only validates their choice to start and finish the packet a day before the start of the new school year, if at all. If student-summer-packet-designers take control over the content of these packets other students will find the information more alluring. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a7fd3fc1f2d9,3B20A3B52316,Some can argue that teachers can pick just as fascinating topics as students. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+96d5db734c1e,3B20A3B52316,"However, because of age gaps and other variables many teacher do not know what students find entertaining. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+629d140b6f76,3B20A3B52316,Many items in the packet also lack the ability to teach valuable information that can lead to the success in the course. Student-summer-packet-designers can use their knowledge from taking the course to make a packet filled with example that they would have benefited from and with problems they struggled with, allowing the new students to be better prepared. ,Evidence,Effective,,
+edb5292a1e5b,3B20A3B52316,People might suggest that teachers know the material the best so they will form the best summer packet. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9d65701bb3c1,3B20A3B52316,"However, students know what they struggled with more than the teachers; therefore, they know what to put in the packet to avoid struggle for future students. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c1b2eeb74788,3B20A3B52316,"Students should undoubtedly make the summer packet for upcoming students. In the past, teachers have made a long, boring, and useless summer projects. In the future, students should find that their summer projects aren't a disservice. Teachers can now give students the opportunity to create summer projects that keep students engaged in learning over there rejuvenating break. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+696533ab92ce,3B563576DE31,"Sometimes having to be a scientist is not the best idea. Scientist discover different things at different paces,such as the ones that these scientists discovered on Mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e7dc60239aa3,3B563576DE31,This face that the scientists discovered have evidence that it is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+02fe3eee5a40,3B563576DE31,It could also be proven that the face that was found on Mars was not created by aliens. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9744e13247b0,3B563576DE31,"First off,the face that was found has no signs of being an alien because any planet has those wierd funky looking holes right? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bfe6059b644,3B563576DE31,"It could have been that with the temperature and time those holes could have appeared making it look like a human face. It could of just simply have been a coincidence that it happened like that. Either way we could say that maybe it was an alien or just a natural landform,nobody has been able to personally prove it because there has not been one astronaut that has went up to Mars and looked at it with its own eyes. The human being has made assumptions about a lot of different things and the majority of the time the human being is incorrect because they do not have evidence to prove that what they said was correct. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2523bba9314b,3B563576DE31,"Next,lets say that maybe the human being is correct,how could scientists prove that it is what the human being suspects? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+218ac77d3d85,3B563576DE31,"In the article in paragraph 2 it reads,""Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa,common enough around Cydonia,only this one had usually shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh."" In this part of the reading the author of this article are saying that it could have just been another Martian mesa,but that this one had the unusual shadows that make it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. Like it says in the text it could have just been the shadows something that make it look like an ancient Egyptian Pharoh. It could have maybe been that Martian that the scientists have said it is. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+342bf43c44f8,3B563576DE31,"Finally,in this situation scientists might be correct again. It could only be a natural landform that formed with the weather or something different that helps little things like these form up. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74becce7879c,3B563576DE31,"There are no certain clues or evidence that this ""face"" could be a human or an ancient Egyptian Pharoh. Sometimes the human being wants to suspect things that are not close or correct to what a specialized scientist can do. Sometimes it is just probably that the human brain gets carried away by what it looks at. Sometimes it helps to pay close attention to what we are doing or looking at, for the hiumans good. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a0fad823542,3B59052B8DAF,This new technology is very useful to find peoples emotions or even to what they're thinking about ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ad85660c4068,3B59052B8DAF,But also it can be very bad to read other peoples emotions because it can become very personal. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+399d2e34875c,3B59052B8DAF,"I say this because what if a kid is having a bad day in the class room and you read their emotions or even thoughts, it can be very rude. An example would be what if some kid was aving some hard times at home before they went to school and they're thinking about what happened the night before they went to school or what will happen to them when they go home from school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fbe91d51a03,3B59052B8DAF,But this new technology can be very helpful because what if that student is struggling in their classes and they're too shy to say anything or to get any help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68ba016ed8c7,3B59052B8DAF,"It can be very stressful and may lead to the student to want to just shut down and shut anyone out. But if you had this tachnology in the classroom it can help the student, becausse then the teacher will know that there is something wrong and try to help the student out with his or her problems in a different way like in tuduring only that select student. Or the teacher could go up to the student and figure out what's wrong and persude the student to be more open and talk about what all is wrong. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7e76afc821b,3B59052B8DAF,But like I had said it can be very helpful or very harmful in ways. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6c12f2c8d172,3BA0E26A657F,I think this facial action codig system would be really helpfull to people who work on computers or students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e0f9f78d30a6,3BA0E26A657F,"comptuer work is boring and lame so i would want it to send me somethjing that makes me laugh or smile. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47890609db4c,3BA0E26A657F,I think the facial acting coding system will be a good idea on life on this plane. t it could help out our students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e84a639f366,3BA0E26A657F,"like it said in paragraph 6 it said the computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then the computer could modify the lesson like an effective human instuctor. or when you get on anybody it could see your emotion and give you something that woukld help with it. it could make video games better and in paragraph 6 it says that
+
+""most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communication so computers need to understand that to"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ac7a23e82711,3BA0E26A657F,Then again some people would think that its weird to have a computer watching your face 24/7 ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7d3cf21840d6,3BA0E26A657F,aybe it could turn into a robot and take over the world. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5cc7ce9e02b7,3BA0E26A657F,but if they did come out with the facial action coding system it would be kinda cool ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7993293a3b7e,3BA0E26A657F,to have videos and stuff to cheer you up if your sad if your in a good mood could send you something to make you laugh. Even if your just doing homework and it could tell that your upset or confused or just bugged out by the problem it could help you without even asking fo9r help it would help you out right away i think thats coool cause alot of kids need help on stuff like that and for teachers they cant help alot of students with work. So before the teacher even gets to them the computer could be helping them alreadfy its like a teaher thats already there and lord knows every student wants that extra help to pass.      ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca3f08b3ae35,3BB86ECD4F58,"Yes, I think technology is good for everyone because your computor can tell when you are bored, happy, and sad ",Position,Adequate,,,
+20601e614a47,3BB86ECD4F58,"I feel like it would be an great idea to create something like this because if you are bored your computor may have something different for you to do instead of sitting there bored about the work you are doing. Also if you are sad and not feeling likr your normal self the computor can cheer you up by doing something to make you feel better. What if you have an computor and it can tell you having mixed emotions and the computor help you with that? I really think if we have this technology today everything would be much better. I say everything would be much better because kids today get bored fast and we need something that would help them not to get bored fast. We really should have an computor that can tell if we'er happy, sad, and even mad because what if it help us out of them type of emotions? What if we'er sad and the computor help us through the day? What if we'er bored and the computor make he work be fun? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a6a59e8f135,3BB86ECD4F58,I really wish we had this type of technologhy in our generation today. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6b089812d866,3BBD17BCB443,"Venus, Venus is known as Earths twin because of having similarity's. NASA hasn't yet found a way to have a rocketship to last on the palnet, so let alone a person could last up there. The longest a rocket has lasted on the planet was three weeks. NASA is still working on a way to send a rocket and people onto Venus wothout failing. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f4c10234006b,3BBD17BCB443,Venus is supposed to be the Earth's twin. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+35e35d4e57ce,3BBD17BCB443,"Venus has the closest density, size and occasionally the cloest planet in distance too. This planet is the second planext from the Earth. All the planets orbit the sun at different speeds, and sometimes Eath is closer to Mars and other times it is closer to Venus. Venus is called the ""Evening star"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bb24db1b05d,3BBD17BCB443,"At the begining no space craft had survived on Venus for hours, but one of the space crafts have lasted for three weeks ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6346c223b898,3BBD17BCB443,"They may call Venus Earth's twin but it isnt a livable place. The pressuure of the planet is 90 times grater than Earth's. Venus has a very thick atmospere of 97% carbon dixide. The conditions are far to extreme to humans. The enviorment would be able to crush even a submarine that can take a lot of water pressure at the deepest point, Venus would liquefy the metal. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc97c394fc0a,3BBD17BCB443,Venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in the solar system. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+40e450765e6c,3BBD17BCB443,"Even thought Mercury is the closest planet to the sun Venus is still hottest within heat and pressure. The temeture is 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The air pressure is also almost sea level on Earth. The enviorment is very rocky, it has many valleys, mountains ans crates. It has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and freguent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. They say Venus used to be covered in Oceans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0d2e813cef5,3BBD17BCB443,NASA is doing hundreds of projects to get a space craft to land on Venus and to explore Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d649a40c9abb,3BBD17BCB443,NASA is experimenting with mechanical computers which were first envisioned in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940's during World War II. Its very shocking that modern computers can't last up on Venus. Modent computers do not have the gears and leavels that the mechanical computer has. That computer is much more controlable and is not more lyable to have problems. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6757673b734,3BBD17BCB443,"All together Venus is not a livable planet, yet and probally will not be one for a while. A human can live on Venus but it will be very hard to live on. As i said before it has 97% of Carbon dioxide and is more likely gonna be very hard to breath. Venus is very very hot at 170 degrees fahrenheit. The air pressure is really close to sea leavels on Earth imagine how hard it is to breath there. The planet is very rocky and has many valleys, moutains and caters. Let's not forget that you may wake up to erupting volcanos, powerful eathquakes, and freguent lightning stikes to probes seeking to land its surface. That all happens on the planet Venus. Would you want to live there? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c6045fa925b3,3BD4064486ED,"What is Venus and how can we konw what it is? A Venus is sometime called the ""Evening Star"" and it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3692d9fc3f06,3BD4064486ED,"The studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of how it said in page 2 ""the Earth, Venus, Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds."" ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+46419c0a7101,3BD4064486ED,The plant Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. In space terms humans is ometimes right around the corner in space ters humans have sent numerus spaceraft to land on this cloud draped world ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa4fef2cfe8c,3BD4064486ED,"In Venus there are thing that we need because in page 3 it said "" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d98571acc4fe,3BD4064486ED,Why are we trying to go to Venus? We are trying to go to Venus there are thing that need to have ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a06d3d528070,3BD4064486ED,"In page 5 it said "" Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape."" It's trying to said it that how can we go there and can we live in that plane. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d3ea54a2a40,3BD4064486ED,The time have come that we need to see what is out there and see if we can make it happen and try to make a different for everybody. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff0b1515a589,3BDE1763ECDA,"One of the brightest points of light in the night sky is the ""Evening Star' which is also a close planet to us called Venus. Venus might seem harmless and pretty from a distance but when you get close it can be really dangerous. The conditions of Venus are hazardous to us. In fact we have had past missions that were never recorded becuase not a single mission succeded. However, NASA is trying to come up with technology that can survive these conditions so we can study Venus. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b8f800a1d646,3BDE1763ECDA,"The closest planet to Earth in density, size, and sometimes distance also is, in fact, Venus. It was even once may have been known as the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus and Earth has come similar features such as rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. However, Venus isn't all that pretty. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e40b798a0dcf,3BDE1763ECDA,There are some really big dangers when coming in contact with this planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02a81c4dd4fb,3BDE1763ECDA,Venus has almost a 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket that covers the planet. The fluffy clouds are really just sulfuric acid in the atmosphere on Venus. The temperature on Venus is an average of 800 degrees Farenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on Earth. Because of these harsh conditions the several missions to Venus were remain unknown because no spacecraft was able to survuve the landing for more than a few hours leading to us not being able to collect samples of the materials on Venus's surface. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+496377c7defc,3BDE1763ECDA,"Despite the harsh conditions and the unsuccessful missions, we could still be able to study Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d95e9f647a3,3BDE1763ECDA,"A possible solution to the conditions is to have the scientists float above the surface on the planet. Another way, is to have a vehicle instead of a person hover over the surface. NASA is working on new approaches to study Venus. They make devices such as electronics made of silicon carbide and test it in a chamber that resembles the same conditions as Venus. When comparing systems that use mechanical parts than modern electronics, the mechanical parts an be made to where they are more resistant to the forces on Venus such as pressure and heat. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b66b57f27bd1,3BDE1763ECDA,"Instead of looking at all the flaws in studying Venus, there are still some major components that can lead us to studying it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+72a51cd28fcc,3BDE1763ECDA,"Even though Venus has harsh conditions that humans are not able to survive on, there are still technological avdvances that could lead us to exploring or living on the planet. Most scientists are curious of new things even if they can not physically study it in which the, ""Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."" such as Venus. The conditions of Venus will not stop scientists or researchers from trying to gather more and more information of Venus. The study of Venus could be an oppertunity to a whole new world. There are ways and technological ways that will allow humans to live on Venus but it just has not been discovered yet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7535c075ae0,3BDE1763ECDA,"Venus is a harmful planet with dangerous conditions. However, with developing technology we figure out ways to study the planet ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13a065edcdd0,3BDE1763ECDA,Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because one day our population could be living on it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2fa08ca28b72,3BDE1763ECDA,"Even though there are dangers, there is no way in studying more about Venus if we never try to come up with ways to safely research it. Venus could be our next planet. To find out if it is then more research and risks will need to come into affect. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+39d22503c70f,3BF8370D18A6,""" It's 2016 and i still look young!"" said Luke. he was the cowboy who rode waves ""Ok dad since Forever ago!"" said his daughter. She was in town for special reasons.
+
+"" Can you tell me a story of when you were young?"" his daughter asked. "" Oh all right,but just one. When I was young I was a wave surfer and-"" he was enturupted by his daughter. "" that part changes every time last time you told me this story it was a sailor and then it was a -"" ""Alright mabey I was just a guy on a cattle boat."" he said.
+
+"" His daugter laughed at him, just a guy on a cattle boat,huh."" she said ""Hey it payed the bills, got food on the table,and payed the hospital bills too!"" he said angerly. His dauhter sat there with nothing to say. ""You promised to never talke about her ever again!"" not knowing what he said. she left the room with nothing to say.
+
+She left the hous got in her car and drove off without a hug or a kiss goodbye. She never had done this before. She never knew her mother.
+
+But of course she came back and he talked about his journeys to china and all different places. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+103642391d49,3BFD98581812,in the artical the autoer shows how they would like to see venus get explored dispite the harsh condisons and odd wether ,Position,Adequate,,,
+91ff4de85cc5,3BFD98581812,the autoer gives many resons why they would like to see venus such as how it is earths twin ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e86124e006ab,3BFD98581812,flying over it with a blimp or jet of some kind ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2aa289c212b,3BFD98581812,"as well as a mecanical computer. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ec94add1a53,3BFD98581812,the authoer states that venus is eraths twin ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f128289a123f,3BFD98581812,this would a huge milestone and would be amazing. one of many resons would be to use it for the study of earth and our sun. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5237f80f2f8a,3BFD98581812,the next way would be a bilmp or jet of some kind that would fly over venus at an altutude that is safe for use. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc3f884db3d3,3BFD98581812,this is however a bad way to get there for the astronuts would be there for a short time becuse of fuel cost and coservaton. as well as there would be no real way to test the surfuse of venus from there ass you could not get to the surfuce. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7d7f60625902,3BFD98581812,the last way to get there is by sneding a mecalical computer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5642898e63cc,3BFD98581812,this would give use amazing resalts. but a the cost of developing a computer that the last time these were largly used was in the 1940's wolud be a fotune and they left that out for they relly whant to go. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e623375b37ae,3BFD98581812,"the from the artical how the auther relliy wants to go to venus so they gave us the resons how it is earths twin, flying over it with a blimp or jet of some kind, as well as a mecanical computer. so in conclusen the auther relly whant to go to venus ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b36658b0b3df,3C01D1FB2BBF,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author provides a compelling and efficient argument to support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Using statistics, factual information, and specific plans being developed as we speak, the author convinces the audience that exploring Venus is worth the risks involved. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d31a62e06861,3C01D1FB2BBF,"The author throroughly describes the immersive learning possibilities that could be discovered by studying the foreign planet, the surviveable and safe travel conditions for humans, and other exploration options to ensure a safe and efficient venture to Venus. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7e9d5ca13124,3C01D1FB2BBF,"First of all, the author immediately combats the argument of Venus being too dangerous to venture. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a68ca3fe3bf3,3C01D1FB2BBF,"When discussing the exploration of Venus, most people are turned off by its reputation as a dangerous and challenging planet for humans to study. While the author doesn't stray away from these harsh extremities, they make sure to prove how these details seem insignificant and how safe travel can still be executed. The author thoroughly describes the plan provided by the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) to allow astronauts to float above the fray and avoid the hazardous conditions. They provide specific qualities of the plan, such as the air pressure being close to the sea level on Earth, the abundance of solar power, and the containment of radiation, to prove how humans would be kept in a safe atmosphere. They even provide a real world connection between NASA's possible solution and a blimp-like vheicle hovering around the ground to make it easier for the audience to understand. The author combats the speculaiton of Venus being too dangerous to explore in order to further support the idea of it being a worthy pursuit. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c39ce72acdb,3C01D1FB2BBF,"Furthermore, the author heavily emphasizes the learning opportunities that exploring the foreign planet would undoubtedly provide us. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2bbf2426c702,3C01D1FB2BBF,"While providing simple, yet interesting facts about Venus, such as it being the planet closest to Earth's density and size, may be enough to intrigue the audience into wanting to learn more about the planet, the author takes it a step further. The author goes in depth about the possibility of Venus being the most Earth-like planet in our solar system long ago. They detail the planet's environment today, consisting of Earth-like structures such as rocky sediment surfaces, valleys, mountans, craters, and other geological findings. They also state ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" This information opens up an entirely new realm of possibilites for the audience to consider, and is more likely to interest them as it directly relates to our life on Earth. The way the author has set up the comparisons of Earth and Venus have allowed the audience to view the exploration of the planet as an opportunity to see a planet that could be like us; a planet with living, breathing forms of life similar to what we see everyday. The author uses this information to encourage the audience to view the pursuit of Venus as a chance to gain information on the things we see in our everyday life, and not just complex ideas that are difficult to understand and most-likely won't affect them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7cacbcfb82be,3C01D1FB2BBF,"Finally, the author provides numerous options being developed for humans to embark in safe and efficient travel to Venus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+904e1bcf2cc3,3C01D1FB2BBF,"When discussing the potential plans to explore the planet, the author states ""Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus."" This quote makes it clear to the audience that scientists are doing whatever it takes to develop multiple, efficient plans for space travel. The author also goes onto provide different examples to further convey how close scientists are to developing the safest plan possible. They specifically mention the use of simplified electronics made of silicon carbide and explain how they've already been tested in a chamber that simulate the conditions of Venus's surfaces, yet how they're still being improved upon. They also describe an old technology called mechanical computer, noting how this technology has already been used frequently in the 1940's and how it can be incorporated into space travel now. The author has given detailed descriptions of the efforts made and the options available to provide a safe embarkment for humans to support the ideas that Venus is a worthy pursit. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+407d4d7a304a,3C01D1FB2BBF,"Clearly, the author has efficiently and convincingly supported the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. By describing all the information about the existence of other life forms and the similarities to Earth that we could potentially learn from the study, the author proves how worthy Venus is to be discovered. The author also rebuttals one of the main concerns for traveling to the planet by explaining how plans are being developed to make travel and living conditions surviveable, safe, and efficient for both humans and machines. In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author was able to convey and support the idea that Venus is worthy of exploration. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+dc4936042b3f,3C0AD7817D49,"My claim for, ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" would go against what the author is trying to say. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d7ed71d7ffaf,3C0AD7817D49,"The reason is, because anybody can say that they made a Facial Action Coding System computers. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+86c348000711,3C0AD7817D49,"Also the Author says that the Facial Action Coding System computers can Deteced when you are happy or when you are sad.
+
+In Paragraph 4 it says that each expression is compared against a neutral face showing no emotion. Also it says that it can scan movements in a real face or in the the painted face of Mona Lisa. Plus it can be used for a video as well that show a new emotion with the software. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f59faeef1c55,3C0AD7817D49,If somebody did make a computer like that then why did nobody put it in a Newspaper or even a magazine ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af083f1c57fb,3C0AD7817D49,"If you are reading this then you would understand what I am trying to say or try to tell you. I think also if they did come put with the computer then people would like to be able to hear what the computer is capable of. If you understand then you would agree with me that the people should know what it does and what it can not do. If it can stop fight's then it should be brought to the people's attention, but if it can not stop fight's then it should not be brought to the people's attention ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a02c1db5d864,3C0AD7817D49,"What if you the reader are using this and it tells you that you are mad then keep it. Then on the other hand you got to realize that if it says that you are mad but you are happy, then give it back to the company that you bought the item from and get your money back. So that is why my claim is going to be against what the author is trying to say. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6bb68e710705,3C0AD7817D49,The reason why that is my claim is because you can never trust if the item will work or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f37ceabbeb0b,3C0AD7817D49,"If a real person is reading this then you will understand what I am trying to tell you. Also if you were wise as well then you can understand what I am trying say by, ""you can never trust if the item will work or not."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae0e595e7567,3C0AD7817D49,So this is why my claim is what it is. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8e80cd25b6d5,3C2FB67A96CB,"I think that the new technology to read students faces in the class room could be of some use, but I also think that it would not be of use in the classroom. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+09e05c3c073f,3C2FB67A96CB,The reason I think it would be useful is it could help a teacher understand some of the kids facial expressions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f19a4878cd6f,3C2FB67A96CB,"A teacher can read the childs face to see if they can help then when they are sad and dont tell anyone, but I also think that it would be an invasion of the childs space, because sometimes when kids or even adults get mad or sad and they dont say anything to anyone it's because they dont want people to know. It could help in somecases like when a child is being bulllied at school and they dont tell someone then the teacher could use the device to see that the child is either sad or mad or even both. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5548ca6d015f,3C2FB67A96CB,"
+I support and do not support this at ther same time. i support it because I feel it could be helpful but I do not suppot this because I feel if a child needs help with how they are feeling they will go to an adult they trust, weather it be a teacher at school or a parent or even a friend at achool.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1fff20c5639e,3C7CCE3A0596,People that think that the face was created by alliens think that beacuase they probably heard that from someone else or someone told them without having any real facts ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d407b8905805,3C7CCE3A0596,"But if we go into more details i remember once i read/seen something about that there might be some alliens out there in space. The face of the earth was created by natrual landform as NASA has said. On May 24,2001 a spacecraft was circling around when they fount a shadowy figure like a human face! The thing is how will we ever know the real truth behind that. Yeah i know people tell us differnt things but how will we know witch one to belive out of all them. We obviosly have to belive NASA because they are the ones that go up there often and let us know if there is anything new up there. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+909fe7d88e71,3C7CCE3A0596,Its not like we can go up there anytime we want and cheke for ourselfs! The bad thing is that we will never find out for our ownselfs but thats just the way things are! ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+45cc778bd831,3C9D9C9C1A16,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,""the author suggests that studying planet Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerous it presents ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+8e51a0790934,3C9D9C9C1A16,"Since Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, the distance are similar too. This planet has different speeds. Though, humans have sent many spacecrafts to this dangerous land. Each mission was unmanned sicne no spacecraft ever survived the landing for a few hours. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+503e3955480d,3C9D9C9C1A16,Some dangerous this planet planet presents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5607aadd7ffc,3C9D9C9C1A16,"the atmosphere is thick and is almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. The clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere and the conditions are more extreme than human encounter in Earth. ""Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system, even though Mercury is closeer to our Sun""(Paragraph 3). It has so much heat and pressure and the weather presents additional dangerous which are, erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and excesive amount of lighting strikes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79d4ccfad82a,3C9D9C9C1A16,This dangerous can really affect humans and humans won't really be able to survive in that planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e31d22643b42,3C9D9C9C1A16,Scientists believe Venus was once covered largely wiht oceans and could of supported forms of life ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6d02241179a8,3C9D9C9C1A16,scientists are now able to knwo more about technology and ivent new spacecrafts. We now have new information of the Planet Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91c24afc9cc4,3C9D9C9C1A16,"Now, we know it's surface is rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2af9dfdc40a0,3C9D9C9C1A16,"In conclusion, I think the more we learn the more we can be able to experience more things and have more knwoledge. Technology has been playin a big part of this situations and expriences. The more technology advances the more we will be able to exprience more. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4be5e6c32e08,3CA8BC5FDD12,My principal has decided that students should do at least on extracurricular activity ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b54740fbd07c,3CA8BC5FDD12,I disagree with this because i think that students can do what they feel like doing and not be forced into something. ,Position,Effective,,,
+fbe165be8ef2,3CA8BC5FDD12,This will probably change a lot of things ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+32a0b05cabd6,3CA8BC5FDD12,We will be forced to do sports some students dont't like sports either they're not fit for it or they just don't like sports at all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e74c522b464a,3CA8BC5FDD12,Some people might want to work on there yearbooks but not everyone gets yearbooks. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c121007634e6,3CA8BC5FDD12,The student council i don't feel like any student would really want to do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3f98694c2fa,3CA8BC5FDD12,Because what will it be about what will they say they might hurt or say something a student does not want to hear. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+506dcafcf9bb,3CA8BC5FDD12,"Sports what will they will have to do and what they will need. In sports you have to have the equipment your so pose to have for that sport. It could be Baseball, Football, Basketball or Soccer and whatever sport there is chosen for that student. Most sports you have to do conditioning so you have to run a lot and some people don't like running. Some people are not athletic and there just not good enough for sports. They might want to have a job and trying to go for what they want to do later in life. A lot of sports you can get seriously injured and some students might not want that to happen to them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5fe909312e60,3CA8BC5FDD12,"What is wrong with the yearbook. What are they going to do with the yearbook because all you have to do is set the students that took there picture in alphabetical order. What will they do when there done with It.
+
+There not going to let a lot of people do it because you don't need half the school. Plus It's going to be hard if everyone wants to do the yearbooks. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b05a05f62861,3CA8BC5FDD12,What will they do with the student council. I don't think this is a good idea at all because hoe are they going to go threw the whole school for whatever they have to say to every individual student. It might take a while for a lot of students or it might be quick. It's going to be hard because some people are good and don't need it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a130be310a53,3CA8BC5FDD12,"I think these things are bad ideas.
+
+I don't think this will be good because students want to focus on there education and to go for an higher future. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fa27249e1ccd,3CB7F7FC1F29,Why should you join the Seagoing Cowboys program? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c191235bb1b1,3CB7F7FC1F29,you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ab3b11a153fb,3CB7F7FC1F29,you could help people over seas and in other countries. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+181808396ba1,3CB7F7FC1F29,"A boy named Luke Bomberger got to do all of the things that you could be able to do, by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dad8537a10e5,3CB7F7FC1F29,you could get to see many unique places all over the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71caf28acded,3CB7F7FC1F29,"A lot of people do not get to see some of the things that you could be able to see during the Seagoing Cowboys program. After the animals are unloaded and you have some free time, you could so site seeing and do all of it for free! Luke Bomberger got to do this while visiting many different countries for free. Now that is a once in a lifetime opportunity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd0c9aadf783,3CB7F7FC1F29,you could travel all over the world for free! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+878ae7dd8a93,3CB7F7FC1F29,That is a once in a lifetime opportunity. You don't get to travel to places for free very often. Luke Bomberger had the chance to go to many different countries and see many different things in those countries. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16b30dda34b1,3CB7F7FC1F29,"when you are in the different countries and you have freetime over in those places, is that you can meet people and learn their about cutures. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4259e5150ec7,3CB7F7FC1F29,"Luke got to go see and meet new people during his free time while people were still unloading the animals, and probably learned new things about those peoples cultures too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92444990a713,3CB7F7FC1F29,you can learn a lot of survival skills on the ships that you are on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e85bccd5bdbe,3CB7F7FC1F29,"If you ever are a capatin of a ship in the Seagoing Cowboys program or in any program, is that you will already know how to control a ship, keep your ship members in order, and know what to do when you are on that ship. Luke Bomberger got to learn a few things on how to contol a ship and what to do when a storm hits and you sail right through the storm. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6dbfad5d5213,3CB7F7FC1F29,you could meet new people on the ship and get to know them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9db28401c8ec,3CB7F7FC1F29,"A lot of people do not have friends or just want to be more social. A way you could do that is by joining the program. After all of the animals are unloaded and you are heading back to your home to pick up more animals, you could play games with some of your ship members. Luke Bomberger got to meet new people and probably made some new friends while on some of those trips, even though he already had a friend that was going with him on the ships and things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a795618b1ae,3CB7F7FC1F29,you can spend a lot of time with animals. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd09da94e00f,3CB7F7FC1F29,"After you are finished with the program, and you need to find a job, you could open a new farm and already know how to take care of most of your animals. When Luke was on the ship he already knew how to take care of the animals but he probable go to learn new things on how to take care of them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+27eaa262290f,3CB7F7FC1F29,"Those are the reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to help people, see unique places, you could travel all ofver the world, you get to learn about peoples cultures, you can learn a alot of survival skills, you can meet new people on the ship and make friends, and you get to learn a lot about animals and how to take care of them. Those are some of the many reasons you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87bb472ef800,3D26F9BC9F2C,Luke didn't paticipate in the Seagoing Cowboys because he hat to stay at home. And because he had just graduated from high school. he didn't think it was nessisary to go and he had a leave at home even tho he had a family at home. He didn't want to just leave them at home with out him. Becuase he had no one to watch them when they was at home alone with no one to talk to. He desided to stay and not go so he can be there with them and he was going to pertect them from harmes way. he loved his family to much to just leaver to join a cowboy group with people her didn't know at all so he said No and that he was staying with them. Because if he would have left it would proboly change ther life and his forever. they didn't want to stay home by there self for a long time he wanted to stay and help them out around there house and other stuff. And because it was to danges for him any way that is why he didn't want to go. And he just wanted to stay and not put himself in danger because it was a war and he didn't want to die and never return. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42fd2a83aa95,3D303A57E7A4,"""SCORE! Three points to the Wildcats,"" an announcer exclaims. The crowd goes absolutely wild, and the players feel proud about their effort. Basketball is only one of the many amazing and exciting extracurricular activities students have the privilege to pick from. There's a variety to what's available, from art to softball to helping produce the school yearbook. Each of those activities are creative, entertaining, and helpful one way or another. In addition, our principal has decided that all students should take part in at least one extracurricular activity. As a result, some students are complaining and disapproving about this decision while others, such as me, think this is an opportunity for students to have a incredible time doing whatever activity they choose. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ddc45b422e5e,3D303A57E7A4,Our school should have these extracurricular activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+de22ec3545c0,3D303A57E7A4,"because it gives students a chance to socialize with new people, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c7a7ff1bb009,3D303A57E7A4,"learn new skills and experience new things, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b1cee69b8595,3D303A57E7A4,entertain themselves while impacting the school as well as the community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1ded58c9dd1d,3D303A57E7A4,"To elaborate, drama, or theater, involves everyone to communicate with each other to create a scene that will dazzle the audience. They must decide how to react, talk, and act to one another to make the performance truly spectacular.
+
+Additionally, students don't just see their classmates when they go to their chosen activity, there are other kids from other grades there as well, so it's the perfect chance to meet unfamiliar people, and chat with familiar people, too. To add to that, the activity likely brings out skills in others that you didn't know they had, and that enables students to connect with one another and find out more about each other. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69e9fcef5661,3D303A57E7A4,"Most activity leaders allow field trips at least once a year. As an effect, students get to go places they've never been before, and if they have, they get to share their experience at that place with different people. Also, multiple activities, such as art, teach students to make certain things. In artistic cases, you get to learn about pottery, clay, watercolor and acrylic painting, different drawing tools, and more. In addition, music lets you explore your voice, public speaking lets you learn how to be a motivational speaker, marching band lets you play more pieces of music with your instrument, and experience more with it, and so many more activities teach you a variety of different things. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e72ea6eecccb,3D303A57E7A4,"For example, teens in charge of the yearbook have a entertaining time making sure their product is pleasing to the eye, so that our school has something valuable to sell to students, and so that they can look back on all the great memories they had at our precious school. Nevertheless, at the same time they're expressing their creativity into the book. Also, the art students create posters and fliers to advertise upcoming school events so that everyone can enjoy that event with their friends. I know by experience that creating colorful, bright papers is a fun-filled activity to do. Plus, some students who are in the Environment Protection Youths of Virginia group volunteer to pick up litter along the sidewalks, in parks, and many other places that would harm the environment of our beloved state if they weren't cleared and cleaned. They have a wonderful time doing just that while chatting to their friends. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2dadc48b8b27,3D303A57E7A4,"To summarize, because students get to socialize with people they never got the opportunity to talk to before, experience new things and get taught new skills, and impact the community as well as themselves, I believe extracurricular activities should definitely be included at our school. They are a very bright part of anyone's day, something that a kid could look forward to on a boring Monday. Also, they could find out new things they didn't have a clue about. A teen gets to talk to others near their age group who started out just being part of a crowd, but because they met them while playing the part of Juliet, they turned into a best friend. Additionally, we get to help the whole state while having a incredible time. So whether it's the applause of an audience at a play, the encouraging comment of a friend on a picture, or the announcement of a score it took a team effort to achieve, the activity that got someone there made a mark on their heart. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ad131938feac,3D3E4F0B74D2,Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a13bd18b6f9b,3D3E4F0B74D2,"Venus's knickname is sometimes called the ""Evening Star"" mainly because Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth has proved a very challenging place to examine closely.
+
+It is also called the ""Evening Star"" because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. On Venus, the temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+46cde515ee1a,3D3E4F0B74D2,These conditions are far more extreme than anything human would encounter on Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc35886ff045,3D3E4F0B74D2,"It is not suprising that the temperature average is so high given the fact that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. So basically, if you walk on Venus you will get burns.
+
+Studying Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky because it is simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.
+
+Yes, Venus has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely, but although it is not clear due to the fact that 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, it is still simple to see from the distant, safe vantage point.
+
+No spacecraft survived for more than a few hours because of the carbon dioxide blanketing clouds of Venus.
+
+The clouds of Venus most likely explains why not a single spacecraft torched down on Venus for more than three decades. Venus's atmosphere at night is not affected by carbon dioxide of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. This is exactly why studying Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky is simple for an amateur stargazer to spot. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c46f4fb275d,3D3E4F0B74D2,"Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8766eca52a97,3D3E4F0B74D2,"Venus has value because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself just like intimidating endeavors does as well.
+
+Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts, it should only be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.
+
+This helps to strive to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90f6cea6cc76,3D3E4F0B74D2,"So, because our travels should not be limited by dangers and doubts, intimidating endeavors should only be expanded to meet the imagination and innovation of the travel.
+
+So, because Venus is simple to see from the distant and because our travels should be expanded, studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because it only presents a small amount of dangers.
+
+So, If Venus was more of a dangerous planet to explore, walk on, and study, would this be a planet that everyone would be interested to study and afraid to walk on to explore?  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03e66ebd46db,3D7B1F039322,"There are many ways to learn new things, through experience, being taught, and a multitude of other ways to obtain new information. School is the perfect place to learn new things from teachers that have extensive experience in their specific area of expertise. It is the teacher's and administration's job to help provide a well-rounded education for their students and part of that is assigning work that the students do not want to do. Summer projects are important so the students continue to use their brain and learn how to retain information. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8b7e5305d2a1,3D7B1F039322,Teachers should design the projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e844bfd20bbe,3D7B1F039322,"they know the material, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3dee8737c85f,3D7B1F039322,"have experience making lessons and projects, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9ab997fd5d20,3D7B1F039322,if it was student designed then the work would be almost non-existent. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6f6e43de1bac,3D7B1F039322,"In order to become a teacher, one has to go to college and earn a degree along with a teaching license and certification. Years of studying and mastering the material provides them with the tools needed to teach their students the subject. Students go to school in order to learn. If they do not know the material, how do they have any qualifications to design a project that would make sure that they learned everything required by the school district, state, or country? People go to school in order to become teachers because they want to help their students learn and grow. Not only is it the subject the teachers are teaching to them, but life skills and tools they can use in the future. If all the work that the students did was up to them, they would lack important skills like researching and communication that could help them in internships and the work world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+31c4e9bd795d,3D7B1F039322,"Charts, flip charts, and simulations are all used by most teachers to show information that is important. In the summer, students aren't going to want to do homework regardless but if the project is set up with clear and concise directions, it makes the work seem less daunting otherwise. For example, if a student had planned a project, the project would only make sense to them because they are responsible for planning it out and the steps needed. When that transfers onto paper, other students won't know what is happening in the brain of the student who created it and will be confused. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6571c64d669c,3D7B1F039322,"If students were given the opportunity to create their own summer assignment, it would most likely end up being under 5 questions with minimal work needed to be done in order to complete it. This does not help the students in any way, shape, or form. Teenagers look for the quick and easy results that aren't as available as they think in the real world. The point of high school is to prepare you for college. If the work you do in high school is easy and not challenging there is a greater risk for those students to struggle more in college with the huge increase in course work. There are some students who crave the challenge and look for the ability to better themselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48e3b0d91f00,3D7B1F039322,If they had the opportunity to create their own project it would be beneficial to them because they are willing to put in the work. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d35ce1017b60,3D7B1F039322,"Teachers can't trust that all students are like that though because each kid is different and most likely, when given the chance, the student will take the day to go to the pool rather than sit at home and do their own research about Stem Cell research. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9886a043997e,3D7B1F039322,"Education, is in the hands of each individual and what they choose to make of it is up to them, but teachers should be there to guide and educate their students into making the right choices with their education. Although at the time, their students might respond to the summer assignment with a groan, it is in their best interest to do the work assigned to them by their teacher. Summer projects should be created by their teachers instead of themselves because teachers know what is important and they know what tools and resources to use in order to learn something new. Students have to realize that teachers want what is best for them and want them to be able to succeed in life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+69c32e020215,3D93701B4E8D,The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2e7a4bb9bee9,3D93701B4E8D,The reason for this is that you can tell weather the person is really smiling or not ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5dba8bdf97f,3D93701B4E8D,"The computer software FACS (Facial Action Coding System) can classify 6 basic emotions like happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.
+
+The passage states that the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face;all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an 'action unit. The passage also states that using video imagery, the new emotion-recongnintion software tracks these facial movments-in a real face or in the painted face of Monia Lisa. It can even identify mixed emotions. Each exspression is compared against a neutral face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+913197273bd4,3D93701B4E8D,The computer can tell weather you are happy or sad ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+36f99fe1255d,3D93701B4E8D,"Like in the passage it says that for an example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f4afeeb9d84a,3D93701B4E8D,"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it can modify the lesson like an effective human instructor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+94d42fde27b7,3D93701B4E8D,"The evidence from this passage shows that the use of this technology to read the emotional exspressions of students in a classroom is very helpful. like stated in the claim and passage ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6a7b766263e0,3D9CBC4F434F,"In ""The challenge of the Exploring Venus"" it shows alot of the good and bad of studies that will help us understand why the author suggest that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e98fcf6cc9bf,3D9CBC4F434F,The article stated that it is one of the brightest point of light in the sky. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5de71efe724,3D9CBC4F434F,Vince is the 2rd closest plant to the sun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94ad7738724a,3D9CBC4F434F,"which meaning 800 degrees fahrenheit and the presseure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.
+
+170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth, although Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our sun, if humans lived there ther could be a chance of additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and freqent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Otherwise the planet would still have some efatures that are analogous to those on Earth such like Valleys, mountains,and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1676764591c,3D9CBC4F434F,Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da18cd87d51d,3D9CBC4F434F,"Asronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may erll once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system and i trust that the astronomers would say that because we still think that Mar would be our planetary visit. Although humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on the ""cloud-draped world"" as they call it. They have said that no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours ,despite its proximity to us and, of course should like a big danger and risk to take, not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. NASA's possibile solution to hostile conditions on the surface Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f5970bdcb96,3D9CBC4F434F,"Researcher cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance, Venus would need to get uo close and personal ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+abfcd8bd1d8d,3D9CBC4F434F,"despite the risks, they are working on innovations that allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus, and some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simlating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. But now they use mechanical computers which were first envisioned in the 1800s and played lots of important roles in the 1940s, by comparison systems that use mechanical parts can be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+592e5fe65087,3D9CBC4F434F,"What i think of all of this is that the author us right to suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the danger and chaos it represents human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Eather and beyond should not be limited by dangers and boubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation as the article stated. The astronomers of today they shall wonder off to make Venus a both safe and scienctifically productive, and the people of todays world would be amazing at all the thing that is happening or what will happened to Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+960cc278e5b6,3DA49C7B4B14,I do not agree with technology to read students emotional expressions should be used because it is just a waste of money. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5b9512fa67e3,3DA49C7B4B14,I honestly believe that teachers or former students should know when someone is upset angry or happy. I mean it would be irrelavent for a school to spend thouasands of dollars to know when someone is upset. Teachers should be able to see if their own students would be upset. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa48584a0ccf,3DA49C7B4B14,Schools could spend the money on more important things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea20e952fb6f,3DA49C7B4B14,like for textbooks gym equipment sports classrooms or even build another part to the school not some emotion detector ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+113a82aaafde,3DA49C7B4B14,"But hey it is 2018 anything could happen. In paragraph 5 it states ""In fact, we humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.""
+
+DR. Huang predicts. ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" How could that even work. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+72226250b5bf,3DA81D432A0F,In this artical the auther explains why exploring Venus is a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8cd13fdcb80f,3DA81D432A0F,"by stating that it is the closest to earth in size,dencity,and mass aswell as being the cosest in distance. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d047a3b33cc0,3DA81D432A0F,He aso states that it could help us get better at sace travel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1458742e43d8,3DA81D432A0F,In paragrah one he is talking about how Venus is closely similar to Earth in size shae an mass by saying ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+842d898fe05e,3DA81D432A0F,"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of Density and size, and occasinally the closest in distance too."" 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4484fc2f4be7,3DA81D432A0F,"He also states in paragrah five that NASA is working on a methid to buuild on Venus by having large floting blimps that fly over the death and missery of the planets serfice. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4608e882ab60,3DA81D432A0F,"exploring Benus could also bring about new methids of taraforming to make a planets serfice hospidible.
+
+Exploring Venus could also bring about new ways to space travle and new technology. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81f11863ef04,3DA81D432A0F,"
+In paragraph seven the auther mentions mechanical computers that dont relay on electricity and small and insitive chips but insted rely on gears and clock works. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f3b6812cbd3,3DA81D432A0F,"So all in all exploring venus is a goodish idea if we can figure out how to actualy , one make it there and two figure out how to sistain a perminant bace.
+
+there is plenty of good evidence in this artical about space exploration and the such and why i think Venus is an exoplanet (a planet that culd or has sistain life) ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+70b338bf61ff,3DB1BD9129DB,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" a man creates a program that can detect human emotion. That man is Professor Thomas Huang. The program he created can detect on how a person is truly feeling. I only know 6 emotions so far and they are happiness, anger, sadness, surprise, fear, and disgust ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a6a048db52f3,3DB1BD9129DB,The program could lead to major scientific/artistic break throughs. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8cddfb5a0c2a,3DB1BD9129DB,The program uses muscle identification to determine what emotion the person is making. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b98caeb803a4,3DB1BD9129DB,"A specific muscle is used to make an emotion. For example, the zygomatic major is used to move the lips up to make a smile. The zygomatic major and the risorius is used to force a smile like if you feel awkward, depressed, or upset but doesn't want to show it. So even the program can tell if you are forcing a smile or you are actually happily smiling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c76404cbc69e,3DB1BD9129DB,Expressing emotions everyday could improve how you actually feel and you may get more out of life than you would with a straight face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ccc54b5e182,3DB1BD9129DB,"People will think you are are happy if you smile, sad if you frown, content if you have a straight face, etc. People analyze how you are feeling to share iin your happiness, make you feel better so you are no longer sad, and calm you down if you are angry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07b42be5f578,3DB1BD9129DB,"With this program, people can now understand human emotions better than than naked eye. This kind of program could be used in therapy sessions, doctor's offices, and hospitals. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+963aa8586c71,3E6D1917A314,"This artical,""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" is the authors way to give ideas on how to help get closer to Venus ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3e9124ffb4ff,3E6D1917A314,"the author starts out with how and what Venus looks like. The author also compares Venus to Earth and says ""[It's] Often reffered to as Earth's ""twin.""' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc9be1522ffc,3E6D1917A314,"The author's article, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" has a very good look into why we need to explore and learn more about Venus. The athor even gives ideas/ways for NASA to be able to explore Venus. Examples like ""...NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."" This is one of the few ideas that the author gives out.
+
+The whole artical is about how Venus is so like Earth or ""Earth's ""twin.""' This is a good artical to look for if looking up ideas for a essay because it gives facts like ""...Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.""
+
+Or facts about the devices that they used in the pass that didn't work like ""...simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface..."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a028a4eb5b86,3E6D1917A314,"To end off on a good term, the author had put in time to let people know that we should think smarter not harder to be able to see closer into what Venus is hiding. The Author says ""...Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doughts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" This meaning not to thing to hard and work with what you got insted of thinking of a way to get all information right away. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+754bda8304f3,3E7CF0FBAF5C,"Studying venus would be really interesting but venus is hard to study because it´s dangerous and it has really high pressure. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+6d61e10f305e,3E7CF0FBAF5C,Venus is sometimes known as earth´s twin because venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5dd989a9048c,3E7CF0FBAF5C,Scientist have tried to get to get numerous spacecrafts on venus but no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Venus is one of the hardest planet to study and research. It´s hard for astrounauts to go to venus because temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what humans experience on our own planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71438a644ee0,3E7CF0FBAF5C,If NASA sent humans to venus it would be really hard for the astronauts to land because it has hostile conditions on the surface of venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+edd92e0ea631,3E7CF0FBAF5C,When the humans would land on venus the air pressure would be close to some of the levels in the sea and the temperature would be toasty. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+980f08f94996,3E7CF0FBAF5C,"In conclusion, venus has challenging things it presents and it would make it very hard for people in NASA to put human life on a planet that has very high air pressure and temperature that we are not used having on earth. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c9377d2e5f4a,3E866ECC376A,"Every summer students are required to complete a project to ensure learning is being accomplished. Some say that these projects should be teacher-designed others say they should be student-designed. A high school student once stated that "" a project over the summer sounds boring "". Others must think how can one make a project during summer fun if its teacher-designed? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+69ae7f51cffa,3E866ECC376A,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ebb061130c39,3E866ECC376A,"it makes each student want to be creative, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa83e041a0aa,3E866ECC376A,"enthusiastic, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8bd91f4829ac,3E866ECC376A,"have better learning opportunities. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+cac45b36d547,3E866ECC376A,Critics say that summer projects should be teacher designed because it keeps the student following a stricted guideline. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+60d90aca721d,3E866ECC376A,"Although following a specific guild line ensures the student will complete the required task thoroughly, it forbids the act of joy. Students are already in school for ten months of the year following a stricted guideline in how to complete a certain assignment, if schools assign a teacher-designed project over the summer it would feel as if they are coming in the way of students summer break. If this project is teacher-designed it would also show students that schools are more biased towards their opinions. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b52ba2bc3fe9,3E866ECC376A,"A student would show creativity by choosing the colors they like or making it into something that shows significance to them. This would give the project more depth and meaning rather than a simple teacher-designed assignment. Creativity is important in a student's life because it helps speak what is on their mind and generate from there. Completing a regular teacher-designed project would restrict the idea of building from your life and experience. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ef0f1c0f104b,3E866ECC376A,"On a usual school assignment students wait till the last minute and stress about what to and how to do it, with being able to design your project there would be less procrastination and more completion. With student-design projects each student has more options in what they can create, making them look forward to completing the task with excitement. Most school assignments don't entertain students while accomplishing them, if schools let students design their summer project they can make it fun. For an example, a group of students can plan on working on this project together and be enthusiastic because their options are open and would also give them the ability to help each other with new ideas. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18ca3fe386d8,3E866ECC376A,"If students have the ability to design their own project they would be choosing what they have to do the research on. This would increase learning because it would interest an individual student and make them want to gain more knowledge about a specific topic. Another way learning opportunities are increased because after the completion of this project, teachers could asses the student on proving that they actually learned over the break. This would also benefit the teacher in learning something new. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2037006d4b19,3E866ECC376A,"summer projects should be student-designed because it promotes creativity, makes it enthusiastic, and increases knowledge. Completing a creative, enthusiastic, and knowledgeable project over the summer sounds far more entertaining than a teacher-designed project. With creativity you can make the project interesting, with enthusiasm you can make the project fun, and with knowledge you can never have enough. Students would have an entertaining and educating summer all in one.          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bc6b6c36a83d,3E875F22BACF,"Plan:A photo from 1998,is a pciture of a mask. So why they ""MGS"" claims is not a face? We don't,be we do know is that a high-resolution images and 3D altimetry takes picture from outer space. It says that ""NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet,snapping photo possible landing sites for it's sister ship"". ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2457f96bfde0,3E875F22BACF,"their is a possibitiy that maybe there is an ""Anicent civilization"" that lived on Mars that we don't know about. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+c02f0a8eba1c,3E875F22BACF,"""A few days later NASA unveilied the images for all to see. The caption noted a ""huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98f1dd848c72,3E875F22BACF,"So basically it tell the readers or the scientist thatat some point of time their was humans on ""Planet Mars"",and really they're trying to get them to realized just because its a""huge rock formation"" what if they'rereally humans skulls under all of the rocks? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5308de912b13,3E875F22BACF,"The Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence that NASA would rather hide,say conspriacy theorists. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ca04af83ab2,3E875F22BACF,"This shows that NASA was trying to keep it a sercet that theirs are head with a mouth,eyes,noes,and ears on Mars and they wasn't trying to put in no type of effort to get deeper in the situation or not even assummed is not normal for a planet that has nobody lived on and has a unusal head that just poped up out of nowhere on ""Planet Mars"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+000835cf1a9e,3E914F66058C,"The author of this work is in favor of taking on the great challenge of landing a ""rover"" on Venus for research and exploration. Venus has many extreme conditions that the earth does not have to endure. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ce287f022732,3E914F66058C,"The author presented many ""solutions"" to these problems. Although plausible, the creations would be impractical and would not produce ensured results. The author's support for the idea of exploring Venus is mediocre at best. ",Position,Effective,,,
+26e8013b3cba,3E914F66058C,Being the second-closest planet to the sun provides for some nearly impossible conditions for human exploration. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+24057dbf6c2f,3E914F66058C,"With Sulfuric Acid in Venus' atmosphere, and surface temperatures being over 425 degrees Celcius (about 700 K or 800 F) , the likelyhood of humans on Venus is nearly nonexistent to begin with. To combat the hot temperatures and the acidic atmosphere, NASA proposed the idea of a ""blimp"" that floats above the planet's shell. Although the blimp could survive high in the air, the practicality of if is not present. Having a blimp that cannot touch the planet is not going to help scientific research at all. While being above the clouds of Venus, it is impossible to see the surface with human eyes. Seeing the surface would require technology that uses light from the electromagnetic spectrum with a high frequency and short wavelength. It is also impossible to collect rock samples from the planet for soil examination. This idea would not be beneficial enough for the risk of investing a lot of time and money. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+921e8c7f6fcc,3E914F66058C,"An additional idea that was brought up by the author was ""Silicon electronics."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e2b16f4ea63,3E914F66058C,"Siliscon electronics would be resistent to the harsh conditions on the planet-- for a while. The systems would run for about a month before total failure. these silicon systems are very expensive to bein with and are still in the development phase here on earth. Creating enough silicon circuits to power a rover or vehicle would take years to manufacture. And by the point of satisfactory innovation for silicon electronics, a new product may have been presented. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+448a3d9e8693,3E914F66058C,"Lastly, a ""cave-man"" idea of mechanical computers came into play. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+89943fb98e1f,3E914F66058C,"These basic forms of work require no fragile electronics at all. Using gears, levers, pulleys, and ramrods, corporations have been able to create many devices. When made out of an acid-resistent substance that can withstand high pressure, a mechanical machine may work. The only problem with a mechanical machine is that once on the planet, sure it can do work, but it would be unable to transmit and data findings back to a receiver on a ship or earth. There would be a point where some sort of electronics would be needed. And as of right now, there is not an effective enough invention that could put humans on Venus to live and research. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6381a8844b86,3E914F66058C,The author of this article is trying to push a principle that is not fully developed yet. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b23284e68358,3E914F66058C,"The reasons that were provided may work after many years of design and development, but right now, none are practical. A combination of the three presented ideas may actually work the best. Use a blimp to float above the planet, tie a cable to the blimp that connects is with machanical machinery, and use silicon electronics to transmit the findings. Damage could be repaired by raising the equipment back up to the blimp. Innovation does not come easy for those who are in charge of it, but ideas like this are needed in providing an answer for a difficult question. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec0b35cc4a73,3E914F66058C,"Overall, the author's arguments do not satisfy the overall risk and reward stakes. After more time passes, maybe he will write another article depicting what will work for sure. The support was not presented in a way that was convincing enough to dive right in to this new frontier of space. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f70950b5f45c,3EC88BE82F4F,"Good Afternoon, You may know me as Dr. Ema R. I'm Head Scientist down at NASA. So today I'm going to tell you about the 'Face on Mars' some people think its just a funky looking rock. Well my friends they are wrong. Now your going to move on to my studying and research I have done to find out what it is and I'm pretty sure I found the right answer. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1166e6ce8111,3EC88BE82F4F,"The 'Face on Mars' was found by us NASA, in 1976. It got very popular over the years then. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3cfca33f8251,3EC88BE82F4F,"By popular I mean appearing in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio, and even talk shows. Now, I know what your thinking. What was so popular about a landform on a planet other than ours? Well first, its not a landform, and second lets be completly honest here, if you were looking through a telescope and saw a face in the sky what would you do? You wouldn't shake it off and go to bed. At least I wouldn't, I would be showing it to everyone and try to turn it into NASA because you would be a hero for maybe finding life on another planet. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42fe3149e8a4,3EC88BE82F4F,The work I did on Mars made me think that we aren't the only planet with life ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ccb3866ff452,3EC88BE82F4F,"This 'Face' isn't a landform, its a lifeform. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+72ed9563a5e4,3EC88BE82F4F,"thats what all the faces on Mars, if there is life, look like ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3a1278593c02,3EC88BE82F4F,"When life on Mars dies they will bury them like we do.
+
+Also, the way this 'Face' appeared there when it was buried. It got buried there forever ago and now the skull is popping up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b17fd53f637a,3EC88BE82F4F,The leaders would put it into motion and try to find more life forms or signs of life ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dfd562785fa4,3EC88BE82F4F,"Maybe these forms there, don't need to live with water and oxygen like we do they may just have to live off of sunlight or dirt maybe something crazy like that. NASA will one day find more evidence of lights on other planets. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3df00fd54286,3EEBAD2DC744,"Studying Venus can be a good thing to do, you will learn more about the planet and why it is our sister planet to us ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a18cd38e6b08,3EEBAD2DC744,"You will have a lot of information and reasonings on why it's that planet or why is it close to the sun. The text gives you a lot of information about venus and why it is called that. As it states ""long ago when venus was covered with nothing but the ocean"", they could of had human life on that planet. You can study venus and maybe found out if there was any human life their besides the oceans that were their. You can be the one who goes to space and can take a look at venus and if it's safe you can probably visit the planet ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d02e47e5f69e,3EEBAD2DC744,"I suggest that it is a good idea to study venus, you might have a chance to visit the planet venus. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+39909537c641,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"Summer break is oftentimes associated with the stagnation of learning, and the loss of accumulated learning from the previous school year. To counteract this, some schools have implemented a system of summer projects to ensure that learning never stops, even during a break. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c4d4e445f590,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"in lieu of traditional teacher-designed projects, students should be able to dictate, for themselves, what summer project they wish to accomplish.  ",Position,Effective,,,
+652028da6041,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"While some may argue that student-designed projects encourage lazy and uninspired design, by designing projects themselves, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3071121ffa96,3EEDE8AD3CB3,students are more likely to have the time and motivation to complete them than if a teacher had designed them. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+07f92f603587,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"By having students design their own projects, it increases the likelihood that they have some interest in the completion of said project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+25a73b9c667c,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"This is because by allowing them to dictate what their project is about, it ensures that the student will select a topic that is interesting to them. This concept of self-selection is already applied to schooling today. For example, the ubiquitous science fair. Within a science fair project, students select a topic and create a science experiment surrounding that topic. By allowing students the freedom to select and design their own science experiment they are interested in, they learn and engage more than if they had, for example, participated in an in-class lab. This is especially important for a summer project due to the fact that, during summer break, students would rather relax than do school work. Especially so if the alternative was to work on a project that they had no say in creating. Essentially, ensuring students are assigned a project they are interested in ensures that they accomplish some learning over their break. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b8869c7672ca,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"laziness is not the sole reason a student may not complete a summer project. It is possible that they, or their family, have plans that conflict with the completion of an assigned project. For example, if a student were traveling to a location where they did not have access to resources or materials to complete a project. Or, if a student took on a summer job and the assigned task was too time-consuming to work on in conjunction with their job. There are a variety of reasons a student may not be able to complete a project. It is impossible for a teacher to take all possible factors into account for each of their students to design a project that is compatible with their summer plans ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+84fd3b46fd45,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"By allowing students to design their own projects instead, each student can individually design their project in a way that is compatible with the existing summer plans. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+760e7318a87b,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"some may argue that allowing students to design their own project encourages the design of lazy, easy, and uninspired projects. After all, why would a student intentionally design a complex project for a time span intended to be a break? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dd274ffb07ad,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"However, both teacher-designed and student-designed projects open up the possibility of lazy work. Teacher-designed projects will inevitably suffer from lazy work while student-designed projects can suffer from lazy design. Either way, students will find ways to work less over their break ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cd86b84cbb1f,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"However, this assumes that students can design their project without supervision. By requiring teacher approval of a project, teachers can ensure that students design a project that is worth completing, while retaining all other benefits of a student-designed project. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5533a49b9ee5,3EEDE8AD3CB3,"While some may argue that student-designed projects will lead to lazy project design, this can be easily negated while also ensuring that students have an interesting project that they are able to complete over their break. By allowing students to design their own projects, they can choose, for themselves, an interesting topic that they are interested in studying. They can also ensure that the completion of the project is possible within their own summer plans. Student-designed projects lead to project interest and completion more than any teacher-designed project ever could. By having students design their own projects, it ensures a unique and interesting learning experience over their summer break. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6037cab874ba,3F0C266099A0,The author supports his idea by giving many examples towards the text. He provied enough support towards his idea. The idea of studying Venus is worthy despite the dangers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+94a294546e67,3F0C266099A0,"With the information provied we can determind that the author gave enough reasons. For example ""These conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth.""(para.3.) ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54be3075341b,3F0C266099A0,"What its trying to tell us is that Venus is a planet in which in life is nothing close to ours. The planet is buring hot due to the fact it's closer to the sun. Explaining that life in Venus isn't possible human. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+973ae973099c,3F0C266099A0,"Scientists take a big role, they are the ones that plan everything. The amount of time and effort placed into their work determines if we get to travel to Venus. For example ""scientists seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get uo close and personal despit the risks.""(para.6.) Getting up close and looking at the real thing there... standing in front of you, unsure on what to to do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30350649a9bf,3F0C266099A0,"Everything around you looking brand new, thats what the scientists want,, To be able to look at the Venus in person, the authour supports this claim by supporting deatil. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+51382c6fbf51,3F0C266099A0,"After reading the passage I am able to infer the main idea, which was the author supporting his idea of Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The infernace I was able to capture,""human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidating endeavors.""(para.8.) This paragraph gives us the idea of us humans. We could be told one millions times not to do somehting, but at the of the day we all end uo doing it like it or not. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+387665e219dd,3F142A739C54,Imagine you were forced to work on a topic you hated ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5ca2fa44c77a,3F142A739C54,Although it gives the students a chance to slack on the project ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3f347013eba9,3F142A739C54,i think students should be allowed to design their own projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+de9d5af2c594,3F142A739C54,it gives them a chance to be creative ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d34d304008f,3F142A739C54,it's something positive for them to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cc2a77d9e50,3F142A739C54,they will always be learning. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1797a9bb932b,3F142A739C54,The students have a chance to be creative and have fun with the project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fe7d9fe8697,3F142A739C54,"It gives them an opportunity to pick something they really love learning about and it helps the teacher get to know them better.
+
+They're most likely to put a lot more effort into the project. For example, you were just assigned a project and the topic on it was something you absolutely hated you're not going to want to do the project or put much effort in it and you're going to get bored with it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff34c4a3f81a,3F142A739C54,It's something positive for students to do during the summer. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40cc58765242,3F142A739C54,"Kids are more likely to get into trouble whether it's because of boredom or they just like it them designing the project will give them something positive to do it'll keep them out of trouble and they'll have fun doing it. For example, one of the students i know likes to ride bikes everywhere even when he isn't allowed to and that gets him in a lot of trouble so one day i took him to the library and we read books and built action figures and he didn't get into any more trouble after that so sometimes all students need is something positive in their life and this project is just the thing they need. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b7b31f15788,3F142A739C54,The students will always be learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b896c7be3eb2,3F142A739C54,"Them designing their own project is an amazing idea because it gives them the chance to be responsible and make desisons on their own. They would have to use their brain to create and complete the project all by themselves. Just because school is out doesn't mean the students stop learning the summer is all about growing and maturing and them creating their own project is a great way to start. For example, one if my close friends won a price for one of her many great projects and she had to give a speech and in her speech she said "" This project has made more responsible and has taught me so much about myself and i hope i inspire everyone to go out and be creative."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc0aca68ce4a,3F142A739C54,"This project is exactly what students need it helps them be creative, it gives them something positive to do, and they're always learning! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d3cdcc7a2778,3F32AA4DA912,Some people may think that the Face on Mars was made by aliens ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ae74700dea63,3F32AA4DA912,Today I am here to share with you that scientificly it is just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54af0b453ce7,3F32AA4DA912,It is just a conspericy that the Face was made by aliens. The Mars Global Surveyor captured photos of what the Face looks like from above Mars. The image shows a landform on the planet that seems to look very much like a face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99e0e96708c1,3F32AA4DA912,The Face on Mars is scientificly known to be a landform in the planet. This landform is much like the Martian equvialent of a butte or mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47f4e62cc485,3F32AA4DA912,"The landform just so happens to look like a face. That's why many people believe that the lanform is was actually made by aliens. Do you know how there are craters on the moon? If so the ""Face"" is almost like that but instead of the crater going in, it's pushing outward. That is the easiest way to describe it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34d72bdd5af9,3F32AA4DA912,So far NASA has not found aliens to be real. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+909a095474db,3F32AA4DA912,"That doesn't meant that they aren't real. It just means that the face is highly unlikely to be made by aliens. But one day if NASA does discover aliens that might be a possibility that the ""landform"" was made by aliens. But until that day comes around it will just be considered a landform based on scientific facts. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70d8c3798e9d,3F32AA4DA912,"The first spacecraft to see this landform was NASA's Viking 1 in 1976. Then 18 years later, on April 5, 1998, the MGS flew over Cydonia for the first time. The picture that the MOC was 10 times sharper than the orginal Viking photos. This became very popular at that time in the past. The Face was used in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, and radio talk shows. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+627f93a5bd45,3F32AA4DA912,These things started all the talk about the face being created by aliens. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+5461b1943fc9,3F32AA4DA912,So in all the Face was not made by aliens at all. It just happens to be a natural landform in the shape of a face. I can see where everyone got mistaken but the facts are that it was not made by aliens. So now you will be able to say that you know a lot of things about the Face on Mars! That is everything that I can explain to you about the Face on Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+78cf32402520,3F400A7BC136,Do you use your cell phone while driving? More than half of car accidents that occur are caused by drivers who use their cell phone while driving. Maybe you should think twice about using it while you are driving. Drivers that put a hand on a cell phone while driving can cause them to get distracted and cause an accident. The car accident can lead up to taking a human's life. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+2a0f1d1d568f,3F400A7BC136,Even if the accident is not big it still could have been prevented by not using your cell phone. ,Position,Effective,,,
+2f80189c0756,3F400A7BC136,Car accidents are one of the main things that are caused by drivers who use their cell phones but it's not the only things that gets caused by using your phone while you're driving. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+41fd5f71cb92,3F400A7BC136,"Sometimes you might pull your phone out at a red light but you don't realize the light has turned green which means you're causing traffic. Traffic is something mostly every driver hates. What if the person behind you has somewhere important to be but thanks to you you're holding them back because you got distracted with your phone? If someone is calling you and you have your phone in your purse or somewhere else in the car you're going to get distracted trying to pull it out of where you have it. If you have Bluetooth on your car you should connect it so it's easier to answer the call without having to try pull your phone out of where it's at. If you do not have Bluetooth, you should try putting your phone on do not disturb so that way you won't have the temptation to want to pull it out. Maybe even fully shut it down or just turn the sound off. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d4490c9204e,3F400A7BC136,"Every day, every hour, every minute as we continue with our life's a car accident occurs due to someone using their phone. Using your cell phone while driving is a big no. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+01183a34c70d,3F400A7BC136,Phone calls are not the only thing that get you distracted while driving but you got to remember your social medias are blowing up which means you're getting a notification every here and there. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+025051b20b7d,3F400A7BC136,"Just knowing your friends texted you or someone posted / sent you something you'll most likely want to take a quick little glance at your phone but then that's going to want to make you use it for even longer which gets you distracted. Maybe you don't like what's on the radio so you want to use your aux to you can put a song you actually like if this does occur just wait till you're at red light but as soon as you're done doing that put it away you don't want to cause traffic. All of these things are ways your cell phone can get you distracted. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c3a54862c9e,3F400A7BC136,"Stop using your cell phones while the car is on drive. Think about the people who are walking around you and driving around you. What if there's a baby in the car? Let's say you get in an accident you just hit someone's family think about what if that was your family who just got injured because you decided to pull out your phone, because you got distracted liking someone's new Instagram post, because you just had to take a selfie for snapchat. All of that could have waited till you got to your destination. Stop letting these little things get to you. Now think about it was pulling your phone really worth it now you just hurt not only the family but yourself, your car is all distorted. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b67fbc0d10e3,3F400A7BC136,Everything that just happened could have been stopped if you only would have waited and not let your phone distract you. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4cc477210410,3F400A7BC136,Some people never realize how much a cell phone can actually cause. This because some people never stop and think about their actions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4074679af83,3F400A7BC136,"Yes, your cell phone might be small ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+72cf6eafe786,3F400A7BC136,but the impacts it can cause are huge. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3e1be8801767,3F400A7BC136,"Next time you want to pull your cell phone out wait till you get to your destination because a phone call or message is not more important than your own life. If someone important is calling your or texting just tell them, you were driving and they should be able to understand that. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d37dfa6ee839,3F400A7BC136,"A picture, song, video, etc. is not worth you getting yourself hurt or hurting someone else is not worth or even making some have a bad because you made them get stuck in traffic. Maybe you didn't even hurt yourself but you did hurt someone else just because you're ok doesn't mean you couldn't have hurt someone else bad. You need to get use to not having the urge to pull out your phone every time you get a notification. If you an emergency and you just have to use your phone pull over and park somewhere just don't pull it out and think you can multitask we you know you got to pay 100% attention to the road.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7f82c5e6bfe7,3F612C6BD191,In my own opinion I think that it is a bad idea to explore the habitat and enviroment of venus because the conditions just seem to unbareable but the author do make some good points on why we should explore it a little more. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c770a25c0e74,3F612C6BD191,"One reason the author wants to pursuit exploring venus is becasue it's the second planet from the sun and really close to earth its often referred to as Earth ""twin"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0745c8a39d0c,3F612C6BD191,Long ago like hundreds or even millions of years ago venus have beeen the most earth like planet in our solar system. Venus have many and multiple things that are similar to earth for instance venus have rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys mountains and craters ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd6642c76cea,3F612C6BD191,I think the author have a good reason to keep studying venus it is earth like with all the similar features besided from the high carbon dioxide and extreme storms and weather temperatures. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89d0e3cc063b,3F612C6BD191,Humans have sent numerouse spacecraft to land on venus but none have survived for more than a few hours. Every since then not a single spacecraft have touched down on venus since more than three decades. Venus have a thick atmosphere of almost ninety-seven percent carbon dioxide. Venus temperatures is really extreme the temperature average eight hundred degrees on a regular. The pressure and atmosphere is ninety times greater then earth's atmosphere. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fad79f7c49d2,3F612C6BD191,Venus has the hottest temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is closest to the sun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f5fb0259e9f,3F612C6BD191,This reason being is because of the weather conditions venus have erupting like valcanoes powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes that hits the surface. These conditions are far extreme then anything on earth. The conditions on venus could crush a submarine accustomed for diving to the deepest parts of our ocean. But still NASA is trying to figure out a way to send scientist to venus so they can study the palnet more. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75c52c65a89b,3F612C6BD191,Scientist say that venus could have been covered in with largely oceans and had life forms on its planet similar to earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2c7a062bdb2,3F612C6BD191,"they say this because venus still have some features that are analogous to thoes on earth. They say that sometimes venus can be our nearest option for a planetary visit. Scientist is making a blimp like craft so that can float thirty miles above venus to study it better. Scientist wants to find out how much venus is like earth and trying to see if it csn somehow be habital in them extreme conditions. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58ae61c95bda,3F612C6BD191,"The only problem with everything thats going is that being above and studing the planet give you limited insight on the ground to see whats going on. More importantly researchers cannot researchsample of rock, gas or anything else from that distance in the air. NASA is making electronic ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+31133c151541,3F63FCA1BD42,"in VAUBAN,Germany executives are making a big leap on forbidden street parking,driveways and home garages. it costs $40,000 to buy a parking space becuse of the retricans on cars. The reason for this ""smart planning"" is becuse 12 percent of green house gases in Europe come from tailpipes. David Goldberg qoutes that ""All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car and that will have to stop"". In the United States the Environmental Protection
+
+Agency is promting car reduction becuse of pollution being at such a high polution rate. paris has the most smog out of any other European capital.
+
+BOGOTA,Colombia had a car free day and millions of colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses. rain did not stop people from pertisipating in this event,for the first time two other colombian cities,cali and valledupar joined this event.
+
+president Obama ambitous goals were to curb the united states greenhouse gas emissions unveiled last week. more americans are buying more and more less cars. Mr. sivaks son lives in san fransisco and has a car but takss bay area if nessecary. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f14b6afaf977,3F8C6F9EBDEB,Hi my name is Luke Bomberberg and I want you to join my program because it is a nice thing to do for the sick people. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+68e75b3b45ed,3F8C6F9EBDEB,It may take a long time to get there and back ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5b28e4e07769,3F8C6F9EBDEB,hey its worth the wait to help the sick ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f5285ffcac59,3F8C6F9EBDEB,You also get to explore new places around the world with me and my friend ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80b1f79454c9,3F8C6F9EBDEB,it also gets you exercising because there is a lot of heavy things like the hay barrels. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec4869b628fa,3F8C6F9EBDEB,This programis also really really safe ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11d81569a117,3F8C6F9EBDEB,". annother thing is that there are about 335 horses, so if you are affraid of horses then this program isn't for you. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e2fc22cd0759,3F8C6F9EBDEB,"In 1945 we went to New Orleans to get started with our program on the SS Charles W. Wooster. I turned 18 when we finally made it to Greece wich meant that I could be drafted for military servrice. By the time I was discharged in 1947 I had made nine trips,the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7403eafc210,3F8C6F9EBDEB,"When I was a little boy,helping out on my aunt Katie's farm had prepared me for hard work,but not from the dangers at sea. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f9673b1dbdc,3F8C6F9EBDEB,On my second trip I served as night watchman. My job was to check on all the animals every hour every night. One rainy night after making my hourly report to the captain I slid down a slippery ladder on my backside. My heart raced as I shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal aalong the edge stopped my slide keeping me from flying overboard into the dark Antlantic. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56293df98cff,3F8C6F9EBDEB,I found time to have fun on board ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+416ed7f0c0bd,3F949C10F639,The author suggests that studying Venus is important for a few reasons. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b09da3f49c70,3F949C10F639,The first of which is that Venus is one of the most Earth like planets in our solar system. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dedeff88be04,3F949C10F639,The second one is Venus could have once been able to be compatable for life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9336a75c2622,3F949C10F639,Another thing that the author brings up is that Venus has powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9e378fe2d88a,3F949C10F639,The final reason is that the author brings up the challenges that NASA is facing in trying to get to Venus. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c281cb29ef81,3F949C10F639,What the author is getting to is that when we finally figure out how to get to Venus this could help us get to other planets as well. That is why I think that the author wants us to study Venus. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e9f5a044244d,3F949C10F639,"Venus has a rocky surface similar to that of Earth's. It also has valleys, mountain, and craters all of this is similar to that of Earth's and can be used to maybe help us more understand out planet. Another thing that the author brings up is that Venus is similar to Earth is that scientist believe that Venus was once covered largely with oceans. This means that their could have been life on Venus such as plants. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7b0bfe2d8b94,3F949C10F639,this is something that we also share with that is also happening here on Earth. If we could go to Venus and study all of that it could help us understand how to know farther ahead of time when we may have a a earthquake. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1d2fbd4f63b,3F949C10F639,"The troubles that we face is the atmosphere and the pressure. These challenges make it almost impossibe for humans to withstand becase the pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on Earth. So what the author is getting at is that if we are able to get through all of these challenges and get boots on the ground on Venus, it would mean that when we are to explore or study another planet we can overcome these challenges much faster. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+da37345c71fa,3F949C10F639,So that is why I think that the author wants us to explore Venus. The first reason being Venus is one of the most Earth like planets in our solar system. The second one being that Venus was once able to be compatable for life. Third is that Venus experiences earthquakes and lightning striks just like Earth does. Finally the last thing that the author brings up is that going to Venus could help us travel to other planets with knowledge on how we can overcome the challenges from Venus. That is why I think that the author wants NASA to study Venus farther and learn more about it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e8ec84557228,3F98D44407D0,"There is a new software the has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of other. The Facial Action Coding System. They put a imagine of Mona Lisa Smile. In the applications called FACS knows how she is like how happy you are or angry. But with her they got a 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguested, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. In the software is the latest innovation from prof. There is Thomas Huang, of the beckman institute for Advanced Science at the University of illinois, working in collaboration with prof. Also they actually calculate emotions like math homework and how a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express , and how we feel. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the faces. And the facil expressions for each emotion are universal, observes Dr. Huang. Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression like not smiling as broadly. With Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much the computer can do. They are 3 things while you are looking in the mirror 1 is raise your lips at the comers of your mouth, 2 is squinting yours eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling at the comers of your eyes and 3 is holding that raise the outer parts of your cheeks up. Towars your eyes. The facial feedback theory of emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Empathy feeling someone else's emotional state may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions. All that is about science or technology. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+318db62cd1aa,3F98D44407D0,I think the application is smart because it show's you how you are in the moment. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+91922ab6fbed,3FC1377C323B,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents ,Position,Adequate,,,
+72009ac52fcb,3FC1377C323B,they have tried to explore Venus for many years and they can't succed ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a81a7c00e4e3,3FC1377C323B,"because only they can stay there for a couple of hours before they can't be out on venus anymore however they do have a nickname for Venus it is called the ""Evening Star"" and why they named it that because it is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky but they said that nickname was misleading because Venus was a actual planet in our solar sytem and Venus was simple to see from a distance but it is a safe vantage point from it said that it was proven a very challenging palce to examine more closely but they often reffered Venus as earths twin because Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and it is occasionally the closest in distance too. But striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because human curiosity it will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. And our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. But the reason why Venus is not good to explore because almost 97% of carbon dioxide blankets is covered all over Venus and on the planets surface it is about 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee6e21cb6a0b,3FCC179594CD,"Driving can be extremely dangerous for you or anyone else, especially if you're not careful and focused. While driving you must be sure that your taking every precaution you can to maintain safety for yourself and others as well. Many people believe that the use of cell phones can be very hazardous, and I strongly agree with that statement for many reasons. Cell phones have caused fatal wrecks that lead to either death or serious injury. For example, ""an article published by Tony Long states that he was almost killed on his motorcycle while trying to avoid being hit by a reckless driver who was on the phone."" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+cbcb5b556493,3FCC179594CD,The use of cell phones while operating a vehicle isn't the most ideal or realistic to ensure your safety as well as others safety. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+46e557ff99fe,3FCC179594CD,"Cell phones cause late reactions, especially for those that are being held in the driver's hand. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+732ced766cb5,3FCC179594CD,"Majority of people have a habit of allowing their cell phone to influence their reflexes and reactions to certain death-defying situations. One of my resources states, ""Not only are 27 percent of all automobile accidents believed to result from talking or texting while driving, but smartphone use has also been implicated in several recent rail disasters as well."" The use of cell phones while driving a vehicle is just as dangerous as drunk driving, maybe even worse because studies shown that, ""texting and driving slows the reaction time more than being drunk"". Meaning that using a phone while under the wheel can alter a driver's reaction time on the road because your focusing on two things at once, although all your attention should be towards driving and driving only. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a55d6db6c7e7,3FCC179594CD,Even a two-second distraction - taking your eyes off the road to pick up your phone and see who's calling you for example- increases your risk of crashing ,Claim,Effective,,,
+405d266a8620,3FCC179594CD,"The National Safety Council reports that, ""answering a text takes away your attention for about five seconds. Traveling at 55 mph, that's enough time to travel the length of a football field."" Anything can happen while you're driving, such as: a car could hit their brakes in front of you, a car could be merging into your lane, traffic might be coming up, or something might jump out into the road. Therefore, you need to keep your eyes on the road at all times with your hands free of anything other than the steering wheel. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dfa0a44f1fce,3FCC179594CD,"It is statistically proven that the cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes with nearly 390,000 injuries each year. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9cafdc586552,3FCC179594CD,"Even with those high numbers, people still choose to be on a cell phone while managing with a vehicle on the road. Some people believe that it is safe to use a phone while driving, or that ""nothing will happen to them"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4bfc94e53cca,3FCC179594CD,"In 2017, there were 34,247 distracted driving accidents and 15,341 that were aged between 15 and 29 were involved in fatal crashes while driving with a cell phone in hand. Therefore, some people may believe that using a cell phone while driving isn't dangerous, but the facts say otherwise. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fe1c4b503f75,3FCC179594CD,"In conclusion, don't operate a vehicle while using a phone at the same time because it can lead to some serious consequences. You are not only endangering yourself but your endangering others on the road, as well as passengers, or even any close-by pedestrians. Driving needs complete attention and focus so ensure the risk of any injuries or deaths because driving is very dangerous. Using a cell phone takes away your focus and attention from driving because now you're trying to multi-task which means you're playing with life or lives. Speaking from experience, cell phones should be banned while driving because they slow your reaction time to anything that may be happening around you. Managing a cell phone while driving is now putting you in a life or death situation that you wouldn't want to be put in.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+70d5070fd74d,4000B8222A07,Do you think cellphones should be used while driving? Using your phone is the top ten ways of accidents ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+95eefd54ca61,4000B8222A07,I don't think you should use your cell phone while driving because it is very dangerous to you and other cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a43422c47c3c,4000B8222A07,"You can look down for 10-15 seconds then look ""BOOM"" it's a crash. That should be one of the least ways you want to die even though it's not always your fault. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a900dccf538b,4000B8222A07,"Using a cell phone is a big distraction, not only to you but to others to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd42b027b361,4000B8222A07,"Everyone has to pay attention to the road just like you will have to. It can cause you to swerve; stop on brakes to hard, not pay attention to your surroundings, and last but you least it will cause a wreck. You can put others in dangers from your use to the road. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40576dcc6b55,4000B8222A07,"Having 4 mirrors in total is the reason for a car, without mirrors you will be driving and have nothing to look forward to and also backwards. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8f9ed721eda7,4000B8222A07,Looking forward is the way to go because if you keep looking at what's beside you and behind you will cause a lot of commotion in traffic. If that can cause commotion imagine what looking down at your cell phone can do and what trouble it can put you in. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85396c477afc,4000B8222A07,Explaining all this to the police is a big mess when the situation can be resolved by just focusing on the road and what's in front of you. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b5411bdb24fd,4000B8222A07,More importantly is your life and you staying alive. If you need your GPS to get somewhere its best you buy a phone holder to hold the phone up on your window or just buy a GPS from a nearby store. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11bf1ebac895,4000B8222A07,"In conclusion, stay off your phone! It's a trend now not only to you but to the whole world. It's impossible to do 2 things at one time while you control a steering wheel. You can take innocent lives fin a matter of seconds for a message or phone call that could have waited. If texting or being on the phone is more important just pull over.                       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4c91ea9df6b9,405D9D4958DF,"Making technology that can identify human emotions would be important, but not very much in everyday use ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+e34318191d6a,405D9D4958DF,"If a student were not able to identify their emotions when seeing a therapist or school counsoler, then this device would work best their specifically because therapists/counsolers are trained to help with humans and their emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ab3f00d4553,405D9D4958DF,Let's say that students are in a class to learn about psychology or somethig of the sort. It would be very useful to find out what a person is feeling down to the percent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec064827c057,405D9D4958DF,"This device would also be helpful there because it tells you about the muscles that move to show a certain emotion. 'For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when surprised...' (D'Alto paragraph 3); students can study their muscles that make their emotions by learning about these muscles. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae4d7dafe2d4,405D9D4958DF,"In paragraph 9, it states '...Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them' ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f65c6b1f665f,405D9D4958DF,"Just by making faces and using this technology, students can learn so so much more about their emotions on a deep level that can help in many ways. It would benefit students, teachers, therapists, and more. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cf28d9d6b540,405D9D4958DF,"In conclusion, this device and technology can help many different people in many ways. Students can learn about their facial muslces, therapists can help their clients learn to identify what emotions they are feeling, parents can hep understand how their children are feeling, etc etc. Students can even help one another feel better in small classroom situatioins all together. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fe972f250622,40936430B82D,"In the first paragraph, the first sentence kind of threw me off a little bit, because when you say it like the paragraph did then it makes it sound bad knowing other people emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dfc184f87a2a,40936430B82D,"I was sad or upset, and I was trying to hide it,
+
+I wouldnt want other people knowing it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+673af478c077,40936430B82D,"Say I was at a family dinner and something happened, then I wouldn't want the rest of my family knowing that I am upset. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c291922b06ce,40936430B82D,"Yes, some of the arguments in the article can be good like, "" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+12f279ba9974,40936430B82D,Thats great but honestly I dont think this would be the best thing in the world. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+edda8f48703b,40936430B82D,"The article asks us ""Does your exspression in the mirror suggest an emotion?"" Of course it does, just sometimes we may not know what kind of emotion it is. Sometimes you may not be able to tell it on your face but you can definitely feel it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a8d72a3761a,40936430B82D,"Other people do not need to know what is wrong with you, rather you are upset, sad, angry or happy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+faa0e84616ab,40936430B82D,"If you have a smile on your face, thats great, the other person thinks your happy even if you arnt. If I want someone knowing what I am feeling, I am going to tell them. I dont just want them or some computer reading my muscles in my face and telling me what emotion I am feeling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+affff3291563,40936430B82D,Technology these days are getting to be way to much. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e106335c868,40936430B82D,"Kids don't need to be told by a computer. ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" Dr. Huang predicts. ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9718835d2ee2,40936430B82D,"What if the computer messes up the facial exspression and does something ""different"" to try to ""help"" that kid, but honestly the computer detected the wrong facial exspression and changed the lesson for the kid, when he really understood it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+787234fc7a87,40936430B82D,This is why I dont think this is such a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9cb401eca2c6,40936430B82D,because sooner or later computers and technology are going to be running the world and later need updated or something and mess evereything up for our upcoming generations.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+43730706a3c3,4094C6225C49,If you thimk it is a alien civilisation you are mistaken. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+825127b183f4,4094C6225C49,If you think it is where is the evadence like houses ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4461ce1615df,4094C6225C49,It can be an astriod hiting the earth or it could very well be a mountain like we have on earth. Another thing i think it could be is an un earupted valcanneo like an other thing we have on earth. Also it can be where the inside of the planit has bin pushed out to cause a natural land form. There can also be other things it can be ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+38a952bf72e0,4094C6225C49,The people that think that it is an alien civilisation they have to back there rason up with a lot of information and very detaild information to get me on there side. Even then I probibly wont believe them it would have to be a very low chance i would take there side. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+be7bbe7ba0dd,40A475C95D6B,The face on Mars is a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6254d02bc963,40A475C95D6B,"In the article it states""The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet."" A lot of people believe it is a natural landform but some people think it was put there. Some people think there is life on Mars. Do you think this face is a natural landform or a sign of life on Mars? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dee4b3b67d41,40A475C95D6B,To you this might not be interesting but you will read about it everywhere. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5cc1b05f1ca3,40A475C95D6B,"In the article it states""The 'face on Mars' has since become a pop icon."" The news is everywhere in places you might not expect! I think the scientists are excited about what they found. Did you enjoy hearing all the news about the Face on Mars? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+469ef9b4b42a,40A475C95D6B,Were you ever reading a book or watching a film and you came across this? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e2025b6c0cd4,40A475C95D6B,"The article states"" It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!"" People could just simply sit down to read a magazine and fined this amazing news. Someone could jump in the car just to hear the news that could make your mind race wondering how they found out the news. I wonder how many people were amazed by this news! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd9788e840b4,40A475C95D6B,"In the article it states""Scientists figured it was just another maratian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9356324925f,40A475C95D6B,This states it unually is common around Mars. People think it is just a landform. In the article it says it is hard to find the face. Everyone seemed excited they found the face on Mars! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20d36ff73f3e,40A475C95D6B,"In the article it states""Some people think the Face is Bona Fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists."" People think there is life on Mars. They dont believe that the face is a natural land form. Many people I bet still wonder how it got there ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c97d3f02646d,40A475C95D6B,I think this face is a natural landform. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+707c8608453e,40A475C95D6B,In conclusion some people believe it is natural and some don't. People weren't the only one who thought it was life so did some scientists. The other scientists say it was a normal thing on Mars. Do you think it was life or not? I think the face is just a natural landform to Mars! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ebac86bd7c95,40BDB6D6B9A7,"People are facinated with the Man on the Moon and the idea of Martians, but most people do not think about life on Venus. Venus is the second planet from the sun and shares many geographical features with Earth. However, studying this planet is made difficult by the dense and toxic atmosphere, high temperatures, and violent weather. Despite this, some people think that Venus should still be explored, and the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" is of this opinion. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e259debf64f8,40BDB6D6B9A7,"The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the rewards of studying Venus and the progress that has been made towards studying Venus. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+6b401b99ada1,40BDB6D6B9A7,"First, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the many rewards of studying Venus ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b36af944417e,40BDB6D6B9A7,"After laying out the dangers of studying Venus, the author explains why scientists continue to study the planet. ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system"" (4). By studying Venus, astronomers and geologists can predict what might happen to Earth in the future. Gaining an understanding of Earth's future may well allow scientists to predict what happened in Earth's past. Scientists are eager to learn about the early years of Earth's past, as it is shrouded in mystery, and this thirst for knowledge motivates them to study Venus. In describing how similar Venus was to Earth, the author says, ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life"" (4). If there was once life on Venus, the similarity between it and Earth would grow. As with geology, if biologists can understand what caused life to cease on Venus, they might be able to predict how life on Venus and on Earth might have started. The author shows that scientists studying Venus reap the reward of being able to learn about Earth's geology and early life. By laying out the various rewards to be had from studying Venus, the author is strengthening his or her argument that Venus should be studied. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2ed9325d1ad0,40BDB6D6B9A7,"Secondly, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the large amount of progress that has been made towards studying Venus ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f44ab4b052c6,40BDB6D6B9A7,"Although the author describes how Venus could be studied from the air, scientists still desire to learn about Venus from the planet's surface. One of their solutions to the problem of getting equipment to last on the surface of Venus is to expirement with new materials. ""Simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of Venus's surface and have lasted of three weeks in such conditions"" (7). Research and experimentation taking place on Earth is giving scientists and astronauts more options for studying Venus. Although conditions on Venus are not hospitable to life, these new scientific advances are making it possible for data-gathering equipment to be sent to the surface of Venus and last long enough to gather data. Other scientists are moving away from traditional electronics and looking into purely mechanical systems. ""Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces"" (7). The alternative that has presented itself to would-be explorers of Venus is older technology, like that found in the earliest computers. Scientists have realized that modern technology is too fragile and that more durable technologies are needed. By turning to other forms of technology, scientists are widening their options for ways to study Venus. The author mentions three different ways that scientists are making progress towards being able to study Venus - from the air, using new materials, and using old technologies. The author's postion that Venus should continue to be studied is supported by the scientific advancements that are serving to make studying Venus a reality. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3807d1eb96e2,40BDB6D6B9A7,"In conclusion, the author's opinon that Venus should continue to be studied despite the dangers is well supported by the rewards of studying another Earth-like planet and the advancements that have been made towards being able to effectively study Venus. Scientists have strong motivation for studying Venus, and new technologies are making it possible for them to overcome the challenges presented by Venus's harsh terrain. Although scientists studying Venus are unlikely to encounter any life forms, what they do discover will help them to understand Earth's past and shape our future. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b42c0f54dff2,40E7A7FDF48D,According to the passage using emotions and expression to show how we feel and animated characters using animations and showing facial expressions to express emotions and how they feel towards other things is not a bad idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c72ed2ca0ac8,40E7A7FDF48D,If a human gets hurt then the emotion and the expression would be squinting there eyes being loud or holding whatever got hurt. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e25d32593785,40E7A7FDF48D,"So giving those types of animations and expressions to robots and video game characters would be good because you would not be able to tell what happened to them if they didnt have any emotion of when they got hurt or smiling. When a human is taing a picture and you want to make it look nice they would smile so they would open there mouth and show there teeth making there face wrinkle. They need to put the same emotion and such for animated characters in tv shows and video games. Also you have to use some muscles to smile and to show facial expressions towards everything like jobs,school,and even taking pictures. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50fcfe73fd19,411AE0653A8C,"I will be taking about the Unmasking the Face on
+
+Mars ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+cd80f7516420,411AE0653A8C,"I believe that the aliens did not find the face on mars. I say people found it on mars. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+1c102c33472f,411AE0653A8C,"Mars is now Famous for the face.
+
+The face was on mars. The face was a pop Icon. The evidence I have that it says that it was in Movies books Haunted grocery store. Thatfor I know it is a pop Icon. To Mars because nothing ever has been found on Mars because it is super hot to do anything on it and ut is made out of sand. So that for I know the face was there before the aliens found it. The Face was on mars because the title of the article is Unmasking the Face on Mars. If you read the Article you would now that. The face is important to Mars and to the scientist Becaus e this is the fist thing found on Mars. The Face will Stay on Mars as long as it does not get damaged some how or disform ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8daed8a223dc,411AE0653A8C,I conclued that the face will be there forever and ever. The Aliens did not fine the face. I am so mad that the you think that the aliens found the face but they did not The scientist found it so think again because if the Aliens did found out that they did find it then we should say sorry to the Aliens for thinking that we found it. I say That we should discuss with our own sicentist to find out who found the face on mars. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9e9135d9bf73,4122443C74C6,I want others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d7cb37949a1b,4122443C74C6,"it is a fun experience, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+68167dca0e89,4122443C74C6,"it helps out animals, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e6859f58351d,4122443C74C6,"you get to travel to many countries and see the many sights. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0e28c4a0535e,4122443C74C6,The Seagoing Cowboys program is a fun experience in many ways. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+288539e9c727,4122443C74C6,"One way is all the places that you travel to. I have seen many landmarks, such as the Acropolis in Greece, Venice, Italy, and I also have been through the Panama Canal on my way to China. Also it is a fun experience after the animals had to be unloaded, we all played baseball and volleyball games where the animals had been housed. Also there would be table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, and many more fun activities. Those were all some ways we had a fun experience during the program. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a6d0d7ce387,4122443C74C6,"Our program also takes care of animals, but that can also be fun in many ways. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8dbfc1b19565,4122443C74C6,"One way is that it can keep you busy is when you are caring for the animals during crossing. They have to be fed and watered three times a day. What helped me prepare for hard work was when I would help on my Aunt Katie's farm as a boy. Also I would serve as a night watchmen, which meant I had to check on the animals every night. Once I almost died doing that job one rainy night. As you can see, taking care of animals can be hard but also fun here at Seagoing Cowboys program. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75ede427822e,4122443C74C6,My favorite part was traveling to many countries and all the beautiful sights. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+be51927cce4a,4122443C74C6,"I have gotten to see Europe and China during our journies. Cattle boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy. I have also toured an excavated castle in Crete, and have been on a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, the city with streets of water. As you can see in the first paragraph, where it also shows I have been to many other places. In conlusion, you can see that traveling a one of the most fun parts of beingin the Seagoing Cowboys program. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb4169db8761,4122443C74C6,"Throughout the whole story, you can see that in the Seagoing Cowboys program, it is a fun experience, it helps animals, and you get to travel a whole lot. Those are some of the reasons that I would like others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a02402d2aaaf,412F965FE701,Informing fellow citizens about the advantages of limiting car usage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0ca14e0db734,412F965FE701,"In paragraph three it state, ""As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"" saide Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26245c4a286e,412F965FE701,"What this statement is saying is that if you do not own a car or those who have sold their car(s), life will propably be less stresstful ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b9cf3dbba08,412F965FE701,"In paragraph fourteen it states, ""Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...[The smog] rivaled Benijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df2a5d2be1ff,412F965FE701,"This statement means that car traffic has gone done in a big amount of percentage, not only in the capital of France but in cities of big population. This one other advantage of limiting car usage. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff162b01e027,413FE0669882,"This article is at the ""The challenge of Exploring
+
+Venus."" ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9ed765dd6447,413FE0669882,"""Evening Star"" this article state in, venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.
+
+""Twin"" this article state in, venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.
+
+""The venus blanked."" The article state in the venus atmospere have almost of 97 percent of carbon dioxide.
+
+""Venus surface."" the article state on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greateer than what we experience on our own planet.
+
+The article essay, thia articlo explain about ""The challenge of Exploring Venus""
+
+venus is a planet nd look like a star because brightes points of light in the nigth sky, and tambien is a ""twin"" is the earth's twin, venus is it really closest at the eart and tambien look similar in the size and in the density, tambien look are similsr in the distance.         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+643277623c55,416154D38103,"New technology is being introduced to mankind almost every second in this world, and now, the latest techonology is a computer program called the Facial Action Coding System which can identify a person's emotions. The question is whether this technology is actually valuable and for what it could be used for. Experts suggest this technology could be used in a classroom to identify the state of mind of a student to adjust the lesson they are trying to comprehend. But, even though this technology may be helpful to teachers trying to keep students active and engrossed in their lessons, the question arises of whether this techonlogy is actually worth the recources or whether what experts think is a great idea is actually an invasion of privacy. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f315ff556868,416154D38103,This technology does sound helpful in the fact that it could gauge the state of mind of a student and help a teacher adjust their teaching methods to accomodate and keep their students students on track. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7a3aef0cfc2d,416154D38103,"The article did state that the techonology could identify when a student is ""confused or bored"" and then ""modify the lesson"" to keep a student engaged. In this way, the technology is useful in the fact that it adapts to the needs of the student. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09cc9d107416,416154D38103,But what can this program do that a teacher's survey could not? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+13290ff2b629,416154D38103,"By the way the article talks about how a ""home PC can't handle the complex algorithms"" and about how complex the system is, it makes people wonder just how much this system would cost and how complicated it would be to enstate said system into a classroom. Compared to a quick survey done by a teacher who asks their students how they feel about their methods of teaching, it is seen how the system would be a waste of recourses and money. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5afd333e5272,416154D38103,"Therefore, although this system is useful in the fact that it can gauge the emotions of the students, it is not much more useful than a teacher who can do the same thing by questioning their students on their preferences and ideas. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6d33cf99b668,416154D38103,"Also, although technology is very much improved in these years, it is still not always accurate and infallible, and therefore may not be suitable for a classroom. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8fea1988dd01,416154D38103,"The article states that the technology associates each emotion with ""characteristic movements of the facial muscles"" and then uses those movements to calculate the spectrum of emotions based on their facial display. But some people show emotions in various ways, and the technology most likely cannot accomodate for the many different ways people express the same emotion. For example, if a student has a resting face that seems generally happy, the system might confuse this dazed face as a satisfied face and think that the student is happy with their lessons when they are actually confused or not paying attention. In the same way, if a student has a resting face that looks naturally sad, the system may think they are unhappy with their lessons, even if the student feels they are learning a lot. A lot of students also try to hide their emotions, like frusteration or sadness, with a happier look on their face, and even though the article states that the system can detect a ""false smile"", it cannot always be accurate as a person may be good at hiding their emotions and displaying a genuine smile. Therefore, since technology is not always accurate and because human beings are so various in the way they behave, the technology would not be useful in a classroom where it may misread a student's state of mind and lead them in the wrong path of education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e1c403d5961a,416154D38103,"Lastly, if the physical problems of the technology have not already been offputting, then maybe the moral problem of this technology will sway opinions against using it in a classroom. If this technology really can ""indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one"", then this means it can invade people's privacy and indicate an emotion which a person is trying to hide. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f2279f75a610,416154D38103,"If a student is feeling sad or feeling stressed about home problems which they are trying to conceal, then the technology detects this and displays it for the teacher and the electronic lesson to see. This is an invasion of privacy, as the teacher does not need to know about a student's homelife or about their feelings outside the classroom. A teachers job should be to monitor how their students are feeling about their lessons, not about how their students are feeling about their life outside of school, and since this technology could pick up on digressing feelings, it should not be used in a classroom where a student's internal feelings are revealed to a teacher. Therefore, using Facial Action Coding could end up being an invasion of privacy that should not be introduced to the classroom. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8718827d6432,416154D38103,"The Facial Action Coding System is a bad idea for the classroom, as it could incorrectly read a student's emotions and give a misleading output that puts a student off track in their education, and also because it could invade a student's privacy of their inner mind. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b6f2399dd42b,416154D38103,"Therefore, installing this system in schools would be a waste of money and recourses, especially when teachers can gauge how their students are learning by simply asking their students in an anonymous survey how they feel about their teaching methods. In this society, technology is used to fix almost everything, but in this case, scientists should quit trying to force technology on behavioral issues and just let humans interact so they can benefit themselves with communication, no computerized middleman needed. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+07bbadfe6e04,4164C4264ABA,the author want to show you all the data he picked up good and bad. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d192d3899bd4,4164C4264ABA,venus is one of the most challenging planets but on the pther hand venus has struck the curasidity of many people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ca188b62fd0,4164C4264ABA,"venus is looked at and called the ""evening star"" for being very bright but it can also be refered to the ""twin"" for having simaller charchaterists like in terms of density and size. on the other hand venus goes a very differnet speed then the other planets. leaving the abillity to go venture very dangerous. venus can have an atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide which can be very harmful to humans along with the fact that it is 800 degrees Fahrenheit. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9b04e157193,4164C4264ABA,its hard but worth it to find out what we can on venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc239e60a87c,4164C4264ABA,and be aus eof this NASA hasnt given up yet trying to figure out ways to safely travel there and back. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+18ce88fd5d28,41C6D3432C49,"Can you see the emotions in the Mona Lisa? A latest technology that can recognize emotions was the latest innovation from Prof. This technology claims it has the ability to read every emotion, even in pictures. Is this a reliable technology or is this something that isnt exact? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b8eb2959d607,41C6D3432C49,"The recent technology on seeing emotions talks about how the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguested, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. How can we know if this is true because we were not there to tell what her emotions where. Yes you can see some emotion in her painting, because it states that Da Vinci studied the human anatomy so that it would help him with painting facial muslces precisely to show emotion. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+33b704cfda3f,41C6D3432C49,"This technology can be good for some purposes. Dr. Huang makes a statement saying, ""A classroom computer could tell when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human structor."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8cc71dc442c6,41C6D3432C49,"This is a good factor, because this can help students with school so theyre not falling behind. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+115f0321bc55,41C6D3432C49,"Overall this technology may have some pros, and it has some cons. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+234e77e0193c,41C6D3432C49,If you put it to good use like for instince helping kids when theyre confused or bored it will show them other ways which is good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+888f4cfc95a3,41C6D3432C49,Then you have your cons. This technology might not always be precise and at some point this could lead to problems when trying to solve a serious situation. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0af51a3bc096,41C6D3432C49,"This technology is realiable at some points, theyre are multiple ways it can help and then there can be some disfunctions. Every technology has their flaws though. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+94ffafd00f2c,41CC238F5738,"So picture you're at home, burdened with homework, rushing to get it all done and all of a sudden, your parent gets an email from the school saying that every student will have to take one extracurricular activity. Your parents are worried because extracurricular activities are expensive, how you'll get to and from that activity, and your school work. How fair is that? It puts stress on you and your family. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c8c4a94e84c6,41CC238F5738,"extracurricular activities are great for growing teenagers, it can be a great safe space for them, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+990b8d73bc29,41CC238F5738,"but why should they be forced to take one? 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e4dc69cb34b8,41CC238F5738,They Are Really Expensive ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8eae3945999f,41CC238F5738,"Some popular activities are dance, martial arts, sports, and music. Which are all VERY expensive. They are great extracurricular activities to do, but so expensive, and not all parents can afford them. For dance, costumes are at least $100, dance shoes vary on quality, but are usually expensive, dance wear is about $30-$50 per piece, and makeup, lots and lots of makeup. Plus, you usually have to know how to sew, and if you don't already, you might have to add the expense of sewing classes in there. See how they all add up? That's about $230 for just costumes, dance wear and shoes. Let's say your parent is a teacher, the average teacher makes $65,000 per year which isn't that much. Some even make $35,000 per year, even less. And to have school expenses, plus that, that's a huge chunk of your parent's paycheck. Some parents have to use that money to pay rent or mortgage, heating bills, water bills, electricity bills, and extra things like clothes, and food. That doesn't give them that much of a flexible amount to spend. Some kids prefer to save their parent's money, plus if they dont want to take one, that's even more unfair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d3eda3cbb7d0,41CC238F5738,They Won't Be Committed To It ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8bc14a01bda0,41CC238F5738,"Let's say the options the school provides are all not of interest to them, so they're forced to take something they don't want to do. How would you like to be forced to commit to something you didn't want to do to start with? I'm pretty sure no one would want that. Though extracurricular activities are great for students to do, some are just reserved and are shy when having to do things in front of people. For students with anxiety, that is extremely embarrassing. Plus, if you force someone to do something they don't want to do, they'll just do it with half-effort and that makes everything one step harder for the people who actually wanted to do that activity. I can almost guarantee that this will happen if schools force students to do this, and it'll just make the activities less fun for the ones who actually want to do it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+970b8ad00de4,41CC238F5738,They May Have Other Things To Do ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cbec4bb51010,41CC238F5738,"in middle school, there's a lot of homework, even more so in high school. A lesson is usually about an hour and a half long. School ends at 3:30, so they'd get home at 5:00. 5 or 6 is the most common dinner time, and it usually lasts about 30 minutes. That's 5:30. Then, they have to go and try to finish their homework. If they have a lot of it, it can take a long time, and can usually lead to them putting off important stuff, like personal hygiene (GROSS!). They're probably super exhausted from their activity, and just want to take a shower. But nope, they have to do the rest of their homework. Depending on how much they have, they could end up staying up really late. Highschoolers can usually end up staying up until 3 am in the morning doing homework. That makes them more tired and not ready to focus the next day. It could've saved them so much more if they didn't have to do the activity. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e2a9e5180d3d,41CC238F5738,"I feel like if schools force students to do an extracurricular activity, they will see lower test grades, lower participation rates, much more attitudes towards them, and more tardiness. This behavioral change will be because of the time wasted on things they don't want to do, and less sleeping hours. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5e4eb879a48e,41CC238F5738,"Though extracurricular activities are great for them, dont force them on people, because instead of helping, it's actually hurting.  ",Position,Effective,,,
+e38624c89155,41DAE20A16DF,"This article starts out by telling the audience about all of the pros and cons of Venus. The first thing is mentions is how at some times we are so close to it that many people think it is a star, and it talks about how humans on Earth can easily see it at a safe distance, but it is very difficult to get close to. Venus is the cloest planet to Earth's density and size. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1e981180665a,41DAE20A16DF,"The author explains how he thinks that it is a worthy cause to try to explore venus, even though we have never successfuly landed a spacecraft there for more than a few hours. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+00810a985912,41DAE20A16DF,The author does very well arguing his or her point. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4bdfaea3ffdc,41DAE20A16DF,"I agree with the author, I think he or she made some very well stated points about why humans should work everyday to get closer and closer to Venus. There are many arguing points as to why poeple would think that it is good or bad to try to send spacecrafts, let alone humans, to Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1b47db7630e,41DAE20A16DF,"Starting out with the dissadvantages, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+615dddd4a5dc,41DAE20A16DF,"the planet's surface is over 800 degrees, obviously not suitable for humans, or any life force for that matter, to survive. Venus has a hotter surface temperature than any other planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun, due to the atmosphere made up of almsot 97 percent carbon. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d77db29de2ae,41DAE20A16DF,"These facts sound misserible so far, but if there was a way that humans could figure out how to land on Venus safely, and maybe even start a civilization there, that would be groundbreaking. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+38418e5b9404,41DAE20A16DF,"The author backs up his or her point by saying how ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" The fact that at one time Venus might have been covered in water has convienced me that there is some sort of way to create life there. Not only does he or she mention how Venus might have once been covered in water, but also informs the audience that Venus has many Earth-like structures. Venus is made up of mountians, valleys, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f0ef2bf46c5,41DAE20A16DF,"The author does a very good job describing and pin-pointing all of the detailed needed to convience someone to beilve in life on Venus, and support sending probes and eventually humans out to discover Venus. The authors talks about how hard it would be for a mission to Venus to be both safe and productive, but he or she also talks about how much we would gain from it. The author shows how floating in a blimp, 30 miles above the surface would be almost suitable for humans to survive, at 170 degrees. The article says that ""Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus."" One day humans will be able to land a spacecraft on Venus long enogh to collect information about the planets past. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c175d5b54b1,41E45EFE43AA,"Summer projects are some of the most dreaded assignments to give to a student. However, they are very necessary in order for students to retain information needed for the following school year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bc81b6dd85c5,41E45EFE43AA,"Summer projects, involving schools, should be teacher-designed in order to optimize students's learning. ",Position,Effective,,,
+16c0c4d9db98,41E45EFE43AA,a teacher knows what to assign best based on the class curriculum. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dd5467ca730f,41E45EFE43AA,"If students were to all decide what the project was and how it should be done, then there would be a multitude of topics and confusion amongst the class. In seventh grade we were given a choice assignment to do. Although it was a fun project and allowed us to use creativity, it didn't lead us to the same information. In a summer project, the main purpose being to continue learning, a student-designed project may not be the best way to learn about a common topic. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1d9c946fe5f6,41E45EFE43AA,the school year would flow much smoother with a teacher-designed project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b14030e5e3a3,41E45EFE43AA,"In my sophomore year I was assigned a summer assignment for world history. It was the same assignment given to the whole class, and was meant to be completed the same way as well. Completing it made it easier for my teacher and classmates to refer to as the year went on. Similar to a textbook, we all were able to use the same resource to make learning easier and allow the class to flow smoother. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8119ff34ecec,41E45EFE43AA,"On the contrary however, students may not have the time to complete a summer project in a specified way. During summer break it is very common for people to travel or have family in town ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+939c98a1bb77,41E45EFE43AA,"every year I go out of town on road trips to visit family. This year my mom told me that we would be visiting family in Africa. Places like Africa may not have all the necessary resources to complete an assignment the exact way a teacher asks. Even if a student were to have resources available, constant travel may limit a student's time and ability to focus. Students may have to get creative and modify or design their project in a way that would allow them to complete it before the beginning of the school yea ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ecdc762eda7,41E45EFE43AA,"If a student were to design his or her project, they would likely take the easy route in order to enjoy the rest of their summer ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d671b3b4b94d,41E45EFE43AA,"Although I have many positive qualities, I am known to take the easy route when it comes to a lot of things. In my fifth grade science fair we were allowed to decide our own experiments to do. Instead of trying to think of a topic that may attract viewers at my booth, or something that interested me, I chose the most basic experiment I could think of, ""which paper airplane would fly the farthest."" When it comes to school students are prone to rush through any work given. Like myself, they'd take the easy route and limit their own capabilities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c24a03a6347e,41E45EFE43AA,"Summer projects are important for schools and teachers to implement whether it be student-designed or teacher-designed. However in the case of productivity, teacher-designed projects bear more benefits. School year flow, class content, and a student's work habits all play roles in why teacher-designed projects should be the main source of assignments given over the summer. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d6732d88e63,41E9768ADAF5,"Imagine this: it's the last day of school, and after ten months of constant, grueling work, you have finally completed the school year. However, you learn a project has been assigned over summer break; a project which requires a lot of your time, and a lot of your effort. Not only that, but it is on a boring, irrelevant topic, which you have absolutel zero interest in; is this fair? Students get put through extreme amounts of stress over the span of the school year, and summer vacation is their break from the large amount of work and effort that they put in over the course of their 300 day journey. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7a447453f7ac,41E9768ADAF5,"Although it is essential for students to continue to actively use their brain during their break, it is essential that the project should be student designed, ",Position,Effective,,,
+7ee1d6760124,41E9768ADAF5,which is proven by the students procrastination on topics they don't find interesting ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df87077347aa,41E9768ADAF5,"their increased inclination to work on something that they find interesting, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+377ee62e8ebe,41E9768ADAF5,the fact that it is their break from school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+21230d19f9d8,41E9768ADAF5,"School has been around for centuries, and although it is completely different now than how it once was, some things have remained the same; for example, the procrastination of students. Majority of students, nowadays especially with the amount of distractions they have, find themselves doing nothing all day and beginning their homework at 11:00 PM. When it comes to summer, the same applies; especially if given a topic they do not find interesting or relevant to them. If given a topic that bores them, then they will likely wait until the last month to even begin the project. This renders the project completely useless, as it's primary purpose was to ensure that the student remains mentally active throughout their summer break ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9643a5f63566,41E9768ADAF5,"Summer break is the average students most favorite time of the year; it is their time to relax, spend time with family and friends, and a lot of times to do absolutely nothing at all. In a students perfect world, no work would be assigned over break; this is obviously unrealistic, as work must be assigned to ensure that they don't come back unprepared or having forgotten things learned in prior years ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de392fcab175,41E9768ADAF5,"However, it must be taken into account that it is their summer break: something that is looked forward too year round and a break from the long, tiresome school year that they just completed ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6089d42001c5,41E9768ADAF5,"Some may claim that the project must be chosen by teachers, as it is their occupation and that they know what is best for the students to succeed. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+79777fe94eea,41E9768ADAF5,"Although this is correct, regardless of whether or not the summer assignment is chosen by teachers or students, it's primary purpose will still be fulfilled: to keep the student's brain active throughout the break. In fact, if chosen by students, the chances of the goal to be fulfilled greatly increase, contrary to how it would be if it were to be chosen by teachers. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+65e3d883b8f0,41E9768ADAF5,"The life of a student is extremely difficult; they are forced to do things that most adults cannot even do. They are told to somehow find time for everything: school work, sports, hobbies, family, friends, and most importantly to be a kid. During the school year, the fact that the student is still a kid is most times forgotten. Summer vacation is their chance to finally be a kid, or at least feel like one. By allowing the student to take part in a student designed project,they are able to take part in activities that they actually want to do, or research things that they are actually interested in. It is always hard to find compromise, but if given an option to satisfy students as well as teachers, why not choose it? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6c33907baf55,4200B5E4E9DF,In the passage that we are presented with the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit by telling us of the similaraties between it and the earth ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1e2fc24106b4,4200B5E4E9DF,Venus is of a similar size and distance wise is not very far from us at all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f4c24fe578b,4200B5E4E9DF,No spacecraft has ever had any human pilots on it due to the fact that the spacefrafts never last very long once they land of the planet. The planet's stmosphere is made up of 97% of carbon dioxide and corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperature of the planet of on average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atomspheric pressure is almost 90 times greater than our own. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cec2b1d32a5,4200B5E4E9DF,"Long ago Venus was proably covered by oceans and may have supported various formes of life similar to those of earth. It has similar geological features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Due to its close proximity it may be the nearest option for a planetary visit. NASA in particular would like to send humans to study the planet. They thing that if they have the space craft hover about 30 miles above the planets surface they may be able to avoid the brunt of the problems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+869320d8ffe5,4200B5E4E9DF,"The temperature would still be about 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0039eee17c2a,42017C1963DB,"""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" in the story the author descrbes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Is this technology to read emotinal expressions of humans wrong? How do they make this technology to read people's emotions? Who's idea was this? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+25590f6b03c0,42017C1963DB,"First, I think reading people's mind's by this technology is wrong ",Position,Adequate,,,
+11be5bf0e449,42017C1963DB,First reason is it's none of our bussines. Also reading people's minds is something that is totally creepy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8d0d3050703,42017C1963DB,"This technology can detect anyone who's happy, sad, angry, and disgusted. Everyone has their own personal secrets that he or she doesn't want to reveal their feelings. They need to invent something to help people around the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c681ece013ff,42017C1963DB,"Second, this idea came from Professor Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Instatute for Advanced Science at the University of Illionois, working in collaboration with Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are exports at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e19f90f7ff6,42017C1963DB,Both of these professors want's to know of their invention to the world to earn credit. Do they even know what their doing? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae531b4204fe,42017C1963DB,"Both professors test's the painting of Mona Lisa of her emotions. Mona Lisa results is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f40c68108aae,42017C1963DB,"Then, this software technology has a constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. All 44 majors muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit"". Then Dr. Hunag relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS ( Facial Action Coding System. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions ( as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). The new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electric code. This technology can read people's emotions by raising your lips at the corners of your mouth. Then squirt your eyes slightly, to produce wrinkiling. Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up, toward your eyes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+516e41ce4a90,42017C1963DB,"Finally, in conclusion it's bad to read other personal thought's. Both professors makes a computer to see emotions in people's mind's. Finding the new technology is rare in the United States. The new computer is not an ordinary science teacher grading your work this is a professional professors inventions. In my opinion these professors should make a new invention to change the world and by not reading people's minds. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1078c641ef02,423A1CA112E2,Modern humans today are always on their phone. They are always on their phone more than 5 hours a day no stop .All they do is text back and forward and just have group Chats on social media. They even do it while driving. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3695c85c6495,423A1CA112E2,They are some really bad consequences when stuff happens when it comes to a phone. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+78933d337df9,423A1CA112E2,Some certain areas in the United States ban phones from class rooms just because of it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4beea06c3d0,423A1CA112E2,"When people have phones, they know about certain apps that they have .Apps like Facebook Twitter Instagram and Snapchat. So like if a friend moves away and you want to be in contact you can still be in contact by posting videos or text messages. People always have different ways how to communicate with a phone. Phones have changed due to our generation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60c0cddc7339,423A1CA112E2,Driving is one of the way how to get around. People always be on their phones while doing it. Which can cause serious Problems. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b1b54830dae,423A1CA112E2,That's why there's a thing that's called no texting while driving. That's a really important thing to remember. Some people still do it because they think It's stupid. No matter what they do they still have to obey it because that's the only way how did he save. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f795933c7667,423A1CA112E2,"Sometimes on the news there is either an accident or a suicide. It might involve someone not looking where they're going or tweet that someone sent. It either injury or death. If a mysterious number says I'm going to kill you and they know where you live but you don't know the person's contact ,It makes you puzzled and make you start to freak out. Which can end up really badly. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+175cb2f5c052,423A1CA112E2,Phones are fine to use and it's also the best way to come over help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb6702a20ab1,423A1CA112E2,"If you go through a problem and you can't find help you ,always have a phone there with you. Even though phones are used almost every day as long as you're safe it would come into use if you get into trouble. Make sure you do not be like this phone while you're in the middle of driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1465b49909d9,423A1CA112E2,The news always updated when people do something stupid around that involves their phones. The safest way is the best way to stay safe. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e28bfb387128,426D179A5178,"In the US many people use different methods to get around. They walk, take a bus, but many use some sort of automobile. All these ways are very efficent but have you ever thought of maybe the outcomes of what cars do to the planet we live on? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d875cc361530,426D179A5178,Let me tell you the things that would change of limiting car usage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f0ea7702072e,426D179A5178,"having to always worry about paying car payments or getting gas can be very pesky knowing you already have to pay for housing,food,clothing and if you have kids supporting them. All that can be very stressfull and make life even harder to live with, like in source 1 mother of two, Heidrun Walter talks about how ""when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ed7b20a77be,426D179A5178,Her not having a car made her life way less stressfull and tense then before hand. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7d8e4db6969,426D179A5178,Another outcome of limiting car usage would be less pollution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+deb03b08737e,426D179A5178,All these fumes are not good for the planet we live on and deffintley not good for us human beings. In source 2 it says how Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air from all the gases in the air from moter vehicles. You know how much fumes would have to be in the air for them to make a driving ban? I mean if thats not putting up a red flag i don't know what would. We only have one place to live right now and its our jobs to keep it clean and protect it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ec350e7b96c,426D179A5178,"Without cars people are gonna have to find a way to get around. In source 3 it talks about the millions of Columbians finding that way when they didn't have there car to do that for them. They looked too hiking, skating, and walking ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5dbee1cdbde5,426D179A5178,All these alternatives are a great way to live a healtheir life then to just let machines do the work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94218110cb53,426D179A5178,another adavantage would be less deaths due to car accidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a43c8f4d6b66,426D179A5178,"So many people die every year from recklace drivers or people driving under the infulence, limiting car usage would drop these numbers down drasically and make life for us way safer. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a394d15f189e,426D179A5178,"All these little advantages would make such a big outcome to everyday life as we know it, it would make our lives better in every outlook.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8970f1784367,427A6B619597,I think you should participate in the seagoing cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+39c357d784d1,427A6B619597,you get to see trueley beautifull places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+163f0fe1d8c1,427A6B619597,you get to be on the ocean ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9db49b25bc6a,427A6B619597,you get to love and care for the cute and adorible horses on board ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b133ae556ab,427A6B619597,you dont have to worry about them running out of food because we always carry enuff to venture the far and cool places we go to. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98eda6010763,427A6B619597,"china and i got to see the Panama Canal,all and all it's just a realy good experience and you would like it if you are an outgoing person. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+47aef0d4e98e,427A6B619597,you get to be out in the ocean ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a37a8234c7e,427A6B619597,who doesn't love that and it just gives you time to explore and have fun with everything the animals the ocean the adventure and the quitness of just hereing the waves and having a great time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b03a1a2f6f1,427A6B619597,And that is why i think you should come aboard with us because all and all you would just have a great time. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+344992e09743,42814ED28C18,I think I am against the Facial Action Coding System. I do not think it is a good idea to use this on humans without their consent. Technology is important but I still do not think this is a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3eedb9cd6a67,42814ED28C18,Using this on humans isn't a good thing. If they want to keep an emotion hidden then I don't think it is a good idea to uncover it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d6c5857c7e2,42814ED28C18,How can the world be a positive place if the happy people who made you happy weren't actually happy. What if that person had a death of a family member and wanted to keep it a secret but some random person starts snooping around and tells everyone that that person isn't actually happy. Since the article can tell a fake smile from a real smile it could possibly happen. Now if the person gives you consent then it is fine but nobody should be able to read someones emotion. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e8622f64cdf,42814ED28C18,Now the thing about the facial recognition being in a classroom might make it more interesting. It there was a way to make school more interesting than that would be great. I'm not sure how far it would go to make the students happy. It says that it could modify the lesson like an efective human instructor ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2e32df94f282,42814ED28C18,but how far would it modify it. Also if this became a thing would it take the place of teachers. If so than that would be a bad thing. So many people would lose their jobs. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2c9c8acc5fcb,42814ED28C18,"It says that it would be able to tell if I am confused which is a good thing. That way I wouldn't have to ask the teacher to come help me. They would just know and come help me, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b64a8695ce6a,42814ED28C18,but I still think it is a bad idea. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1a83810a3c3a,42814ED28C18,I'm just not sure that it is a good idea to have something that reads emotion. I feel like some things that are better off covered up will be uncovered. Technology will consume our world if we are not careful. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+59a2e687566d,42A20744DECF,Do you like to travel around the world? Well if you do you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+179e662ab20b,42A20744DECF,Even if you dont like to travel your demeanor will change when you join this program. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f55d8f49990,42A20744DECF,"We have table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games to pass the time by. You will be so exuberant that you joined. You will be like a kid on Christmas morning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+906eb45574bc,42A20744DECF,You will get to see new places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59054e223074,42A20744DECF,",and you get to say you have been there before when other people have not been there ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ec6d610e189,42A20744DECF,You will never be melancholy on this trip beacause there is things to do all the time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db946c55b02d,42A20744DECF,"You get free breakfeast every morning. There will be eggs,panacakes,bacon,sausage and more. If you join this month you will get a free trip to the next place we go. On the boat there is a pool,and there is a hot tub. The pool and hot tub closes at 10:00. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aa20b841fa03,42A20744DECF,I cracked my ribs but that did not stop me from having fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76e2bce1e666,42A20744DECF,"I only had to stop working for a couple days,and then I was better than ever. When joining in this month you get you dont have to pay for a class abought the safeteys of being on a boat. You will be more exuberant than Christmas morning. My freind Don Reist got me into this program,so I hope I can get you to join this program like he did to me. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+505629255eef,42A20744DECF,"We have table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games. These help take up time while going to are destination. You get to see new places,and get to tell people abought it so mabey they will join to. If you join in this month you dont have to pay for a class abought safety of being on a boat,and you dont have to pay for the next place we go. You get free breakfeast every morning. When I joined I did not know abought if I would like the program but I did,and im still it and I like it even more every day. I hope your demeanor will change like mine did when I joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. That is why I think you should join this amazing program. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cbadc6f67d7e,43121098266D,"Did you know that Earth had a twin? Well not exactly a twin, but a planet that is very close to Earth in terms of it's density and size. That planet happens to be
+
+Venus. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3d2ab3841308,43121098266D,"Since the planet is very identical to earth, we are all going to want to explore it. Exploring and studying Venus comes at a cost though, it is a worthy pursuit despite the presentation of it's dangers. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7997e4992269,43121098266D,"Venus is a planet in our solar system. It is referred as the ""Evening Star,"" as its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. It is the second planet from our sun. Many people confuse Venus with being a star, because of its nickname. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c45dfbc6245,43121098266D,"trying to examine Venus more closely then of the safe vantage point of Earth, can be very challenging despite it being simple to see from the distance. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bf9f9501bcf9,43121098266D,We are all closer to Mars than Venus sometimes due to the speed changes at which they orbit the Sun by. Us humans send a variety of spacecrafts to the cloud-draped world for it to land on. No spacecraft has survived the landing for a couple hours. This means that all the previous missions to mars were all unmanned. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+712e533f8c88,43121098266D,All of these failed missions have explained why Venus hasnt been touched in more than three decades by a single spaceship. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d9c69227a941,43121098266D,As you can tell Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study because of its reputation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aafb19de8828,43121098266D,"The atmosphere of Venus is very thick as 97 percent Carbon Dioxide covers all of it. The planet's tempatures on the surface average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is greater than what we experience on Earth by 90, all of these conditions are way more extreme than what we experience on Earth. Trying to visit Venus would completly liquefy and melt any spacecraft near it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e7e39563baa,43121098266D,Many scientist are trying to explore this planet despite its inhospital conditions because it is very identical to Earth. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1624c4384df6,43121098266D,"It used to be one of the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, Which facsinated many Astronomers. Venus was probably covered by many bodies of water and forms of life could have been supported, just like Earth. The planet now has a rocky surface with many valley's, mountains, and craters that makes astronomers itch to further expore it. Despite it's very hard conditions to even get near the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4f1159614d5,43121098266D,"Venus is a very cool planet. As it is very Dangerous to further study and explore,It is all worth it in the long run. The planet has very many earth-like qualities. So it would be smart to see if there was any signs of life. Venus is worth all the dangers because its a worthy pursuit.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8b586bb6e48e,436E25853B7F,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during break. Should these projects be student or teacher choice? Are the students able to create their own? Students summer break is their time ,so why not let them keep it that way? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5d9872cb3dd2,436E25853B7F,"These summer projects should be student-designed, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+662334d99040,436E25853B7F,an increase in the practicality ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b52684546094,436E25853B7F,creativity of the project completion. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fb5fc81c438,436E25853B7F,"Summer break, the time for pool parties and vacation for students: to get away from school. Therefore, why should they be forced to do some teacher choice project that they will most likely dread ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ba14b4c4ac62,436E25853B7F,"To increase practicality, the student's design is more likely to get done, and get done well because it'll be their ideas ,not the same boring thing from their teachers. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19a5f68f70e8,436E25853B7F,"When students and school faculty sit in a classroom on the first day of school, ready to present their summer projects that were teacher-designed they hear the same things reiterated in a hundred different ways. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42444a84cb32,436E25853B7F,"Whereas student designed assignments will have a variety of different posters, illustrations ,and more. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+26b3a2d9417f,436E25853B7F,"Some people may say, that having the students design their own projects isn't a good idea because of the stable structure most teachers are able to implement more so then some students. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b7117350db82,436E25853B7F,"While this is a good point, it can be easily counteracted with the simple statement of, if these student aren't able to create and be slightly independent now, When will they get another chance? This why the teacher-design isn't a better idea. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fc6af595980f,436E25853B7F,"while these projects may be dreaded either way it is far more realistic to allow the students to choose their own. Furthermore,the creativity and the practicality of the project completion if it is student-designed is leaps and bounds more then that of the teacher designated summer assignment. This is why summer time is the students time to play,create ,and designate. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+25b744a661c0,4380C1BD3461,Use of the Facial Action Coding Sysytem can be very valuable for computer learning in the class room. This system can detect emotional expressions of the user which would then cause change in the computer teaching. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9db3666dc026,4380C1BD3461,"A child could get bored or distracted easily, but if that can be detected ahead of time, the process would be shifted to hold the focus of the student ",Claim,Effective,,,
+966955bc366f,4380C1BD3461,"What if the student does not understand what is being taught to them throught the computer teaching? Well, the computer can read their expression and accomodate to the needs of the learner. Likewise, the student could be ahead of what is being taught, academically, which could be read by the facial decoder and adjusted in their lessons ",Claim,Effective,,,
+90fdac8e2e78,4380C1BD3461,Teachers could then track that data to further helps their students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2ceff909e315,4380C1BD3461,Being able to automatically adjust to the needs of their user in a classroom would benefit the students and teachers of a school. ,Position,Effective,,,
+ffb5154bb7c3,4380C1BD3461,"First of all, computers with this facial coding would be able to help the student using it by detecting any readings of boredom. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+60c885c1890c,4380C1BD3461,"If a student becomes bored or distracted while using computer programs, it can turn the student off from the lesson. This technology ""can make computer-animated faces more expressive"" in any interactive activities the student might encounter to hold its attention (D'Alto). Also, layouts, fonts, prints, etc. could be altered to make the lesson more interesting to the user, therefore catching the student's attention with something it deems fun. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d6eb3900ecc6,4380C1BD3461,"While some children become uninterested or lack focus, some students just do not have the correct cirriculum for their academic needs ",Claim,Effective,,,
+358003aae738,4380C1BD3461,"By using facial coding, the computer could adjust the lesson like a human tutor would. for those students struggling to understand the certain area, the computer would ""modify the lesson like an effective human instructor"" (D'Alto).
+
+Likewise, some students are above the level they are given, academically, and need more of a challenge. Through reading their emotions, the computer could arrange harder concepts for the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1619e591968,4380C1BD3461,"In addition, teachers would also benefit from the use of facial coding. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f472b5b30648,4380C1BD3461,"It is hard for teachers to truly know how a student is fairing in all areas of school. So, by tracking their students' data, the teacher can make additional adjustments to either get the student help, or create a better challenge that will grow their education. In using facial coding programs to calculate how their students are doing, the teacher can appeal to whatever needs their students may have, and even find out if a student is having an ""off day ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1527dffaa4bd,4380C1BD3461,"Based on the evidence given in the article, the use of Facial Action Coding Stystems in the classroom would be wildly valuable. The computer can detect many levels of emotion to accomodate their program to the students' needs. If a particular lesson bores a student or that student has lack of focus, the computer can adjust and change many aspects of thier layout to catch the student's attention. Also, students can receive the correct level of work- whether that be too easy or too hard. And not only can students benefit, but teachers, as well. They can track student progress to further accomodate their needs. While technology can be used for many unethical things, the Facial Action Coding System would be extremely effective in a school setting.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c9869bbef60c,439B4B707E10,"A 3-D computer is a model of the face all 44 muscles and its called an ""action unit"". The Dr. Huang relies to work on of psycholoists and Dr. Paul Eckam, the creater of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Dr. Eckman classified six basic emotions suprise, anger, happiness, fear, and sadness. Then he made associated each with charatcteristic movements of the facical muscles.
+
+Dr. Huang smiling broadly "" even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression"". Huang using video imagery, new emotion-recognition software tracks these movements in a real face or the painted picture of Mona Lisa. The weighting the diffeent units in the software can be even identify mixed emotions. Even each expression can be compared against the neutral face.
+
+The humans perform the same impressive ""calualtion"" every single day. if we can probably tell our friend how they're feeling because by the way look on there faces. But most of us would have trouble describing each facial. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6d9f63b406ad,43A603645B8A,Summer projects should be student designed because honestly what student wants to do their work over the summer. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+51c3769ecff8,43A603645B8A,Student designed projects may include what they did over their break or what they wish they did over break ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d5fd32a8715,43A603645B8A,some students will most likely forget about it anyway because its summer ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6cca4f3f1e6d,43A603645B8A,some people have to work also ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed95f9ef13ad,43A603645B8A,"i believe it would be more interesting for a student designed projects because it would most likely be, again, what they did over the summer. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e0c5586e89b,43A603645B8A,"students, indeed yes need their education and they need to learn, that is why if a teacher just hands them a project and say here you have to have this complete before you come back after summer break. that will knock the interest level down a lot for students ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd8a5bef9a8b,43A603645B8A,"when its summer break i love to go off and have fun with my friends and family, we always are out doing something weather it be hanging around the house or off on a trip somewhere, other students dont do this and it is honestly really cool, last summer my girlfriend and i went down to nags head with her family, i had the most fun time while we were down there, even though i accidentally left my wallet at her house. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4155b1a00f1d,43A603645B8A,Students learn best when they are on their own and/or out doing something ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57507086a96e,43A603645B8A,"the teachers already know what to do about a teacher designed project and that i do believe is why some students dont get along with the teacher. Teachers want to help kids and kids that have troubles listening or learning, i'm not saying that teachers dont listen because you have some of them that do, but, unfortunately teachers dont interact with students as they should ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae6cf9b51344,43A603645B8A,a student designed project would make it a lot more entertaining and interesting for the teacher ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6d7ef92e829,43A603645B8A,"it allows the teacher to sit back and read about who that kid is, what that kid likes, and how that kid acts, it shows a lot of that and it is really helpful for the teacher to actually understand the student that is doing the project and know how his or her lifestyle is, i agree, students should come up with a student designed project over the summer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5ddecc73d5e,43A98A5165A6,"Over the summer, schools require students to do a few projects to make sure they continue learning. Over a three month long break, it is easy to forget material and or not feel motivated to learn new material. Assigning projects will help encourage and enforce students to continue learning. The debate is, should teachers assign the projects or should students design their own projects. Teachers may have more knowledge and experience creating projects but if students are allowed to create their own projects, they will benefit from that experience because they got to chose what was most important for themselves to work on. They will also likely make it more broad, which allows students to make each project more individualized, each project will have a special twist to it. It will also be more discussed, it will become a trend to talk about it, students will likely feel more pressured to do it if everyone talks about it. Students will also come up with enriched new project ideas. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1fc19b93abee,43A98A5165A6,students should design their own projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+087f8166fd30,43A98A5165A6,"they will appreciate it more, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f027a108584,43A98A5165A6,the project will be more discussed ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8ba3f776103,43A98A5165A6,the projects will help students figure out what they need to improve also allowing them to improve themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ac1323941a5d,43A98A5165A6,"If someone for example, spends time and effort making their own meal, they are more likely to appreciate it rather then if someone gave them a meal. Comparatively with the students devising their own project, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd3a11e69a3e,43A98A5165A6,if they know how much time and hard work came with making it they will likely appreciate it more. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0ffde1f95be5,43A98A5165A6,"If they appreciate it more, they are also more likely to try harder on the project then they would have otherwise. They will also think it's a better idea if they formulated it rather than the teacher. People tend to love and appreciate their ideas more than other people's ideas. Even now, their are a lot of students who complain that they don't like the projects given to them. A lot of students blame the teacher if they got a bad grade on a test or a project but with this idea, they do not have someone to blame so they will be more pressured to do the project. Even though teachers have more knowledge and experience, students know what they themselves need to work on and improve with. Giving them control and a free opportunity to dive in deeper in areas they need more improvement in would make students be thankful towards the school. Some students may not take advantage of this but schools still need to keep faith that the majority would. The students who don't, probably also would not do it if it was teacher assigned it, but hearing ""student made"" is encouraging. Therefor, more students would get it done rather then if it was teacher made. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4cc0f87ff130,43A98A5165A6,"Having the projects be student made will ensure it will be more discussed, which will have beautiful outcomes. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+363b5631cfcd,43A98A5165A6,"Students will be challenged to think of ideas that will benefit them as well as new ideas teachers did not think of. There's more students then teachers, someone is bound to think of a new unique idea. Students will have a chance to make their summer projects fun and something to look forward to. Another reason is teachers assign projects but sometimes they get busy and can't think of new ideas or don't have time to discuss with other teachers to find the best idea. Students on the other hand, probably have thousands of ideas they've wanted to do but were never given the chance. They also have a younger mind that may have different ideas then a older mind would have. Students are also with each other more than teachers are, they will discuss more, if they're allowed to make it fun, it may become a trend to talk about. These projects may also bring students together, if they are working together to make a project they all agree on, that;s teamwork. They may also check in on each other for inspiration and or just because this experience successfully made them closer. This also may create some useful peer pressure to do their work and learn. Maybe this will lead to students doing work more often overall and bonding with their peers with learning. Learning will become more than a individual process and more than just reading from a text book. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ca78ca35550,43A98A5165A6,"It is important to take a minute and consider what you want to learn, how you'll learn it, as well as what areas you need more education in. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a9bb6d6cb762,43A98A5165A6,"This experience will give students more control and prepare them for college. It is important for kids, especially teenagers to understand how to use control and work independently. If they get to design a project, they will start thinking about their education and what they like verses don't like. This will teach them how to figure that out on their own with a little bit of support, preparing them for the real world. When they start discussing, it will continue to help them think how to make the project and themselves more individual. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+90ffb97cbfd4,43A98A5165A6,Yes this may just be a small few projects they do over the summer ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+05385e3f1707,43A98A5165A6,"but it can be seen as so much more than that. It will improve everyone's ability to work with others, which is a crucial skill in life. It will be challenging to combine and compromise on different ideas. If used correctly, you can figure out more about yourself, for example, if you like to work individually verses in a group, what kind of learning style you want the project to be, what the project is on, how much work you're willing to put into it, and so many other things. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+285113e507c4,43A98A5165A6,"students should be making the projects for summer break instead of teachers because they will appreciate it more, the project will be more discussed, and the projects will help students figure out what they need to improve also allowing them to improve themselves. This will provide a amazing opportunity and experience for students which will cause them to love the school even more. New ideas will stem from this as well as a new found love for learning and education.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8fef7954ddc5,43C31084455B,"I am going to show my opinion about Texting or being on the phone while driving and, I show some you'll what could happened when you decide to be on the phone while driving. An I hope when you are reading this, I hope you chance your mind about texting while driving and I should thank all my reader for taking the time up to reading this essay. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7593e5ca195c,43C31084455B,"When you are driving a car you hear a text pop up on your phone and you want to get it so bad and you do but, when you do you stop paying attention to the road for just a minute then a car behind you hunks because you aren't driving right and that make you jump so you start driving right. The driver was just lucky that he just got hunk at or it could've binned much worst like a car accident, and someone could have got hurt ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8cb74f0b493,43C31084455B,"In my opinion people shouldn't not be texting while driving because it only takes a simple mistake, and someone could get hurt. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7200bef791c5,43C31084455B,I think that it was a good idea that modern cars develop cars that you can call people and talk to people on the phone while driving plus they have their full attention ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83554e739502,43C31084455B,"When you are texting while driving you looking up and down while driving and I would suggest people should put that do not disturb on your phone or you can put it in the glove department, so you won't be interrupted while driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebfbfa07df46,43C31084455B,My conclusion to all this is drive safe because I don't want to look on the news and see anybody getting hurt because of you are on your phone. If you don't care do it to save the other people from driving and I see why they are pushing this to be outlaws so there could be less accident on the road. I hope and thank you for reading my essays.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7dbcd9f70ff6,43FDEB1E411C,"What if there was a way to tell teacher's if student's are sad, mad, happy by using a computer. Something that will tell teachers if that student is confused on what is being taught. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ad8dccb92640,43FDEB1E411C,"Teens now of days hide their emotion's from parent's ,teachers, friends, anybody that's close to them ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d5ff735a2430,43FDEB1E411C,". You won't know how that child feel's. Holding their emotions in, can cause problems in the classroom. Student's will lose focus on what's going on the class, thinking about thing's on their mind's. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b1bc00a3660,43FDEB1E411C,"The lastest software innovation from Prof. Huang can tell you if someone is mad, sad, or happy. All the computer need's is a 3-D computer model of that person face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c8a220cfbfb9,43FDEB1E411C,Having this kind of technology to read expressions can be good in a classrooms. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9ee580a611de,43FDEB1E411C,"It'll tell teacher if that student is confused or bored. This type of technology will also tell if students are happy, mad, or sad. Teachers can confront students by asking if their okay, what part of the lesson in confusing to them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63025df09e33,43FDEB1E411C,"Using this techology more kids will get good grade, even more kids will gradute. Students will be able to get work done because of teacher asking if their okay or what they don't get about what's being taught.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d9d9758583d1,44442D65C858,Can you tell if someone is happy or sad? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a147ab05be94,44442D65C858,Using technology to read students facial expressions can help out in so many different ways. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dce7ce64d06f,44442D65C858,"A classroom computer can read a students facial expressions, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45390fa903ab,44442D65C858,"they use facial imagery, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab8a28d31f2f,44442D65C858,humans perform the same calculations every day. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6c61a17044b,44442D65C858,A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or is happy or sad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4241992d80a0,44442D65C858,"If you smile when an ad pops up on your screen another similar ad might appear but, if an ad pops up and you frown then it won't have the same ad come up again. Because of this the students would be happier and cheerful. If a student was sad or bored when working on a lesson then it would change the lesson and make it more fun and then it would be more effective. This would make the children learn more and not dread being at school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7edf5d57865,44442D65C858,Using video imagery to recognize the facial emotion. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+98f57a0c8bcd,44442D65C858,This weights the different units of the face so that the software can identify mixed emotions. Because of this they can tell all of the different things the painting was feeling. Every expression is compared against a face that shows no emotion at all. This is so that they can know what to look for in the face and see the differences between a neutral face and a face with mixed emotions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c71546fde8a6,44442D65C858,Humans perform the same calculations every day. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4514334ebdb1,44442D65C858,"Humans can tell if someone is sad or worried etc. by their facial expressions. Because of this we know peoples feelings sometimes. We would have trouble describing exactly what they were feeling just by looking at their face but, thats what the Facial Action Coding System does. This is saying that people can't tell exactly what other people are feeling just by their faces so that what the Facial System does. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67c7574e1d2e,44442D65C858,"The Facial Action Coding system does so many great things that would help schools and society. It helps with schooling because it could make it more fun, they use video imagery which helps recognize the facial emotion, and humans perform this act every day but, the Facial System helps with expressing the emotion. These all help the world in so many ways. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03148bb6d600,446A878D528E,"In the article Luke was asked by his freind don to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no so when he said yes that would change his life. So then now he has been on nine trips since the first ever trip that he has taken. Luke was always busy tending the cattle during the day. He was having lots of fun even when he got knocked over the boat and broken his ribs. He was playing board games and everything like that to keep him busy while he was healing.
+
+The reason of Luke going on trips across the oceans because he likes it and he was born to do it. Also his freind asked Luke to come with him to keep him company during the trips. Luke was waiting for some thing to drastically change his life and he to his wish off the drastic change. Luke would stop going with don if Luke didn't like the motion sickness,or because there where a lot of storms,or he didn't like tending the cows during the long and tiring journey. If the possibility was that Luke didn't like the sea his freind would be like are you ok and or something like that.
+
+In conclusion Luke loves the sea and he wants to keep going out and adventuring the wild and the unknown. Luke couldn't say no because it was his freind don and he wanted to explore another island. Luke loves the same because he likes tending the cows and he likes his fellow crew mates that are with him on his journeys to the out and the open sea. Another reason that is because he wants to be in dangerous storms and worlpools. Luke want to take the risks in the dangerous sea. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f0ba55fd585,446C81F7D0B7,Studying venus is a worthy pursuit becaue it is a well known planet ,Position,Adequate,,,
+286840f409d1,446C81F7D0B7,"venus is the closet planet to earth and also has the hottest surface temperatue of any planet in our solar system . '' astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system '' this shows that venus is a likely planet. There are numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for human to study , However NASA is working on other ways to study venus . ''Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of venus '' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42933bf1ffc6,446C81F7D0B7,this shows that its alot to learn about venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+125f60a67292,446C81F7D0B7,".""striving to meet the meet the challenge presented by venus has vaulse , not only because of insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because of human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+26d87f3d0cbb,446C81F7D0B7,this shows that venus is challeging despite the dangers ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b06ec9dd0a86,4483D41956AE,"The make of Mona Lisa smile will be tough because she had 2 percent of anger and 9 percent of disgusted. Mona Lisa is only at 83 percent happy, so she need to remove those anger and disgusted. People makes many emotions, so they can express how they feel. When people are in a fight, they showed their anger which include emotion. Eckman have many basic emtoions, and it can also associated each with characteristic movements of their facial muscles. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0428f0746482,4483D41956AE,"First, people have many different emotions. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+64946afdcc0d,4483D41956AE,"Most of humans would have trouble describing each favial trait. Whenever someone tightens their lips that mean that they are in anger. Computer can recognize the subtle facial movements that human use to express how they feel. When someone make a movement of one or more muscles that is called ""action unit."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d389a0d770c,4483D41956AE,"Then, many characters can make a movements of facial muscles. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a889b506d648,4483D41956AE,"For example, when you are surprise, you have your mouth open and raises your eyebrows. Each expresseion that people makes is compared against a neutral face. Muscular action units indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45e761ff9fc1,4483D41956AE,"Finally, making a communication with others will also showed your facial expressions. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0260b520c556,4483D41956AE,"You can tell how your friends is feeling by looking on their faces. Computers can tracks your facial movements and expressions. Computers stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. For example, computer can recognize when you are becoming confused or bored. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09762aabdb1d,4483D41956AE,Making a facial movements and expression while communicating with others is important because it will tell the others how you feels. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4dd73ed4369e,4483D41956AE,"Mona Lisa don't smile often, but the computer can make her face smile by using the imagery. Facial impression and movements are not just for communicating it can also be in while looking at someone or reading a books. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e87dcaa1be25,448CB43A2D43,"Do i think that using technology to read emotion expressions of students in a classroom is valable you may ask, ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+18888500b310,448CB43A2D43,It is a marvoulous idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec6e9488d042,448CB43A2D43,Technology has come so good in the past 17 years. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b1e0ba9f6b1f,448CB43A2D43,"I remember back in 2000 when the flip phones had just come out and fast forwars 17 years later we now have a computer that can read anyones facial expression and tell us how they are feeling. I can't even begin to imagine how much more advanced technology is going to get later on in life, it already seems to be that we could possibly have all the technology we could ask for, yet people all around the world just seem to be getting better and thinking of smarter ways to invent new things. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b3cd07ffd906,448CB43A2D43,"Why is this a good idea you may ask. For starters if technology will be able to read kids expressions while learning and being in class for teachers there will be one very good benifit. "" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"" Dr. Huang predicts this is going to be a very good thing for teachers, because teachers will be able to know what a kid is feeling this means that the teach will no longer have to keep going over the same information with the same kids just because one kid does not understrand it or isnt paying attention. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f456aecc3f38,448CB43A2D43,"The teacher can focus on those targeted students spicificly, and not have to go over the same information multiply times. Knoledge is a great thing to have. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a2ea192761d,448CB43A2D43,"One good benifit from this is that teachers can teach more to kids in a more faster way so they can get more things done, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5132162ec81d,448CB43A2D43,because the FACS will tell you if the kids understands the information and or get bored that way techers can work with those kids in a different time and move on to more things with the kids that do understand it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2543a2006917,448CB43A2D43,Having computers that can read kids expresions to tell you whether you are bored or confused is a genius idea. It will be a good thing for both reachers and kids. The science behind it is also neat for people to understand how it came about the FACS. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8744acff243c,44D318388E8C,"Soccer team, basketball team, football team, drama club, yearbook club, student council, math club, marching band and more. So many sport teams and school clubs available to any student, usually free, but still some students conclude that they don't want to do any activities after school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d800919b7116,44D318388E8C,Students should have to participate in at least one extracurricular activity because it is beneficial to every aspect of their life. ,Position,Effective,,,
+589c3de41d21,44D318388E8C,Extracurricular activities can help improve students' social skills ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2dc61f545e33,44D318388E8C,they have to interact and work with each other outside of school so much that many students will even start to make new friends. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58b9eea4844e,44D318388E8C,If a student is playing a sport it will help him/her get outside and get fresh air after hours of being stuck inside school. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+53fc4d61a14c,44D318388E8C,Playing a sport will require exercise making the students healthier and therefore happier. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+56e023780343,44D318388E8C,and are sometimes unhealthy because of the lack of exercise ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67ad957355cb,44D318388E8C,Extracurricular activities are powerful learning tools because students are learning while having fun. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d73bb59cdcbe,44D318388E8C,"Students on sport teams might learn about teamwork and the positive effect of good sportsmanship while students in drama club might learn about how to project your voice and speak confidently on stage, two very important traits if you want to be a leader. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ac6761e92f42,44D318388E8C,Joining an extracurricular activity may give you new interests and goals in your life ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+370fb490b00d,44D318388E8C,"For example, I started my first season of marching band last fall and now it is a very important thing to me and I have made it one of my life goals to march in D.C.I. (Drum Core International): where the best and biggest marching bands in the world compete for title of grand champion. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15f666b705fc,44D318388E8C,Many students use homework as an excuse not to participate in after-school activities ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+73c62197d0f4,44D318388E8C,But that problem can be easily fixed because there are several clubs and teams that meet once a week or even meet on the weekend. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a02bc7e65c3d,44D318388E8C,Another excuse is that the price to participate in these activities is too much. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f2ddee6b546b,44D318388E8C,But that problem can also be fixed easily because there are several free clubs available to students. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+50c115038ad3,44D318388E8C,"Extracurricular activities should be made mandatory because they help students socially and health wise, are educational and can guide students to new interests and goals, and can be a very small commitment that doesn't interrupt homework. They can do all that while still being very fun and exciting. Schools are offering teams and clubs that are fun, educational, and can be joined without any disadvantage, they deserve to be mandatory.                  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d64a413e66c0,44D3C95615CA,"Yes,the use of this techology is valuable beacuse maybe what you'er are upset and there is no one there to make you feel better. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+cb0d98237c00,44D3C95615CA,"That at least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions. The person who is making the software is Thomas Huang,of the Beckman institute for advanced science at the university of illinois""(paragraph 1) .Huang is doing this by trying to recongnize other people facial expression. This computer software is a 3-D printer which can make a mode of the face.""The process begin when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 4 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles""(paragraph3).A 3-D printer is way better then a normal printer. At least for a 3-D printer it gives you all the close up details of how they are feeing.
+
+The movement of the one is called action unit according to
+
+Dr. huang who relies on the work of psychologist,such as Dr. Pual Eckman,creator of FACS (paragraph 3).The computer will calculate this everyday ""In fact, we human perform this same impressive ""calculation"" everyday amd for instance,you can probably tell how a friend feeling simply by the look on her face""(Paragraph5).This can calulate every single movement that you make. So here what the people who is making the software want you to do. This a partner they will like for you to take a mirror a genunie smile and forced one. The real smile is called a zygomatic major that lift the corner of your mouth.""Meanwhile,muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes""(paragraph8).I'm pretty sure is the muscle that are around your eyes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1aa4ad0be1b0,44D73D95E310,the author suggests that studying venus is worthy pursuit despite the danger. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+85ae08838df4,44D73D95E310,i think he did good on support the story abouts why it worthy but it might not be worthy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6db934708834,44D73D95E310,it might just be that all the spaceship they was using or the stuff on the ship making it not able to make it all the way up there they could be making the spaceship to havey or they need to study somewhere else first just to see if the ship the reason why the cant make it there and back. i think they should try a new ship or try to make it to somewhere else before trying to make it over there try somewhere closer so than maybe you find out how to get there or mybad get close to get to there that just how i see it if you say it worthy than try a diffent plant just to see if it easy to find out how to get to that plant you been talking about that why when u pull up all the reseach you can say as i was reach i find two way to get to the plant and they gone say how u find all of that to go with that and say when u find stuff you can get stuff from it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85b2f24f59fa,44E2726DA1B3,Your principal has decided all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c5b2ecb3888e,44E2726DA1B3,I agree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a19164023b9a,44E2726DA1B3,now days all kids do is stay home and be on there phones and do nothing. I know that because I used to do the same thing before and i didn't like to do anything at all but then I started playing a sport and it help a lot but i think that ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4bc1fb6cfb08,44E2726DA1B3,Participating in a extracurricular activity may help you by staying healthy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19cdfc67c17b,44E2726DA1B3,get you out of trouble ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd8916f603dc,44E2726DA1B3,"and get you in a good college. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e551308200c3,44E2726DA1B3,"by playing a sport you can help prevent a lot of things like maintain a good weight, and keep you from getting sick. Keeping a good weight is good for your health because it keeps you from getting other diseases,more than 1/4 of the people in the U.S. are obese. Why not start at a young age and prevent from being sick and other things. Another thing that can help is eating healthy, we can prevent sickness to in order to do that you might want to think about trying out a new sport. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6420f2ab3b54,44E2726DA1B3,"you can avoid a lot of drama. I learned that social media can get you into a lot of trouble, half of the time a lot of the drama comes from social media. Maybe if you join a club or a sports team you can think before doing something that can get you in trouble. One time my friend made the soccer team but she got in trouble so they kicked her off the team and she learned from her mistake and never got in trouble again. When in your in a cub or playing a sports half of the time you don't have time to be in drama get in trouble. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a3eec247ac4,44E2726DA1B3,now a days colleges are looking to see if you have participated in any sports or clubs. When i graduate high school i want to go to college and a study to be a general surgeon and participating in a sport or joining a club can help me get into a college. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3807056afdd3,44E2726DA1B3,You meed new people when you join new clubs and make new friend ships. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+56b0b7471bb4,44E2726DA1B3,When you want to go into a club or in sports do something that you like not something your friends like or something that can help you in life with. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79fca67c97e2,44E2726DA1B3,"staying healthy,getting out of trouble,and going into a new college can help you when you participate in a extracurricular activity. staying healthy by playing a sports and eating healthy can prevent you from getting sick. Staying out of trouble can avoid a lot of drama from school and social media think before you do something your going to regret . Joining a club or participating in a sport can help you get into the college you want and you can meet new people and make new friend ships. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d4931b1466e,44E343ECD9B7,"""What's the matter bud?"" Thomas says to his best friend, Charlie, as he doesn't carry his huge smile today as usual.
+
+""Oh it's nothing."" replies Charlie who's obviously not as happy as he always is. Thomas would sure like to know how is friend is feeling; but he can't because there's no humanly way possible to if Charlie doesn't want him to know right? Well actually he can ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7084b4d16844,44E343ECD9B7,"There's a new kind of technology called Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, which enables computers to identify human emotions. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is very valuable ",Position,Effective,,,
+27f441db6728,44E343ECD9B7,"Like in ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto, it could be used to show when a kid is becoming bored and let the teacher know so that the instructor could switch the lesson up to grab the kid's attention ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c729e424c45,44E343ECD9B7,Another effective was it could be used would be for it to show how some kids are feeling to limit them getting into any kinds of trouble. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+686002ccc919,44E343ECD9B7,And finally it could be used to detect if one student just isn't grasping the matter of the subject that everyone else is getting with no problem. There are endless ways this technology could be used to better a classroom and this technology should be used in a classroom with students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eef157551e4f,44E343ECD9B7,"In the article, Nick D'Alto used a quote from Dr. Huang which was ""'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2c3bba7a3ad7,44E343ECD9B7,"In the sense that kids often time get bored in class, hence the reason they have a bad grade or get in trouble in that class, something has to change. Maybe it's the child's fault, but your traditional lesson isn't the most fun. If the instructor could find out what's boring the child and change the lesson to keep the child entertained then maybe the child wouldn't get into so much trouble with that teacher or maybe the child's grade in the class would take a huge leap. Who says learning can't be fun? With FACS learning could be something kids like to do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3f3a5c70b13,44E343ECD9B7,"In addition to keeping everyone awake, FACS could be used to keep people who aren't feeling too good get better. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6cc62a3c5253,44E343ECD9B7,"Everyone deals with things that others probably don't know about. With FACS a student could come into class like Charlie and no one knows about his frustrations so they try to do their normal jokes and games with him. If a student ever comes into class not feeling the best or not wanting to be bothered, FACS could sense that and instead of people messing with that kid or having that kid be bothered, that child could have the option of being away from everyone while the child cools down. That could stop the child from being involved in a physical altercation or any altercations at that. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bdd1f7debaf4,44E343ECD9B7,"Finally, everyone knows that all children learn at their own speed. FACS could be used to find out whose stuck on someting that everyone is flying through. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0b82750b8eb6,44E343ECD9B7,"When the teacher is teaching something that everyone but one student understands and the teacher stops for questions, that one student may feel too embarrassed to ask a question so the lesson would go on and only get more difficult as time goes by. Instead of that happening, FACS would let the teacher know what kid that is so that the teacher could reach out to the kid and give them extra practice or even a little tutoring if they need it, that could really be a huge help to children that don't learn as fast as others. Usong FACS to determine that could really translate for the great or good of the grades of students everywhere. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf97ee0756ef,44E343ECD9B7,"In order to make the classroom a more happy place, a better place, FACS should be used with students. FACS could detect bordem so that no kid is bored enough to drift into space or sleep and miss valuable work time. FACS would be good for keeping kids that are dealing with things away from people that'll trigger them. Also FACS can be used to show weather or not children have questions and need help but are embarrassed to say so. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is very valuable. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+91a9e61f76c2,455D0FE2839E,"The technolgy is good for seeing emotions in paintings I can see that but, my question is if we actually except it or need it at some point. What the story says has my attention but not quite everybody's. The FAC i'll Say its not valuabe because students wouldn't be really into that maybe some will but the majority will not. The object looks like something kids need in there life to learn someting new. That will motivate them for them to do great things and try to invent other things. I just writing what I know how to right this doen't really matter because imma fail anyways but this story wouldn't really valuable why because I know our generation and if we have it in our school no one would care. I wouldn't here one person say ""hey lets check out the FAC"" because I know what im saying I would like to speak the truth. The story had some interstesting facts about how could detect everything from the body (Alto, page 1). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+af02bc8e1af3,455D0FE2839E,So I would say that it really isnt valuable. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+14c2ca518317,457D9B0CF71F,"My fellow citizens, allow me to make an urgent announcement. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+476d18742f55,457D9B0CF71F,Stop with the constant use of cars. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b6167db90602,457D9B0CF71F,"It's damaging not only us, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd89e1ebb742,457D9B0CF71F,the environment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5ee281c9241,457D9B0CF71F,"I'm not saying to completely stop using your vehicles, although we might see a larger change than expected, what I'm saying is to manage your car usage wisely. Every time we pick up the keys, start our engine and take off to the nearest grocery store, we add a larger threat to the environment. In 'Paris Bans Driving Due To Smog' by Robert Duffer, it informs of the enforcement France is taking to clean up it's polluted cities. Duffer shows us how ""the smog"" that invades the city became a rival to Beijing, China, which is known as the most polluted cities in the world. Imagine going outside to see the beautiful sun, and instead open the door to cars delivering blinding ""smog."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eeeeb5552e93,457D9B0CF71F,"There's some of us who suffer from stress and anxiety. There's some of us who look at our community and are probably never wanting to go outside again. That is not a community to live in. We deserve to feel relieved, relaxed, and renewed from time to time. In 'Car-Free Day Is Spinning Into a Big Hit in Bogota' by Andrew Selsky, it demonstrates a perfect example. Selsky writes about a ""Car-Free"" day in Bogota, Columbia, and a man shares his side of this event. Carlos Arturo Plaza tells us, ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air polluton."" Selsky writes in paragraph 28 the benefits of this event. He writes, ""Parks and sport centers bloomed... Dramatically cut traffic... New restaurants and shopping districts developed."" Look what we can accomplish from not using our cars as much. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6918852b670c,457D9B0CF71F,"We're in a time where money is the top priority in our lives. All those gas prices, and the car insurance car owners must pay is ridiculous. Sometimes people can't even sleep at night due to all the thinking of ""how will I pay this?"", or ""how will I pay that?"" It later becomes a constant battle. This is when technology comes in handy. Now with the common ""Facebook"" and other social media, we're able to connect more and more. It's sad to see people waste their money going to a friends house for probably an hour or so, when they can just talk virtually. Elisabeth Rosenthal, writer of 'The End of Car Culture,' most likely will agree with me. Rosenthal inputs Mimi Sheller's say in all this. Sheller is a sociology professor at Drexel University, and she cites important factors on paragraph 35. ""Internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c33e9069b183,457D9B0CF71F,Why drive and pay for gas when you can get on the web? You'll be glad you did. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4d038ab32fd3,457D9B0CF71F,"Now, many will be able to disagree with me saying that, ""we need cars to drive long distances,"" or, ""I rather pay and have my own privacy then be with twenty people I don't know on a bus."" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2fab2d341a88,457D9B0CF71F,"That's fine. I'm not saying to wipe out the fact that you have a car, all I'm saying is to use it wisely. Drive long distances, not short ones that can take you ten minutes to walk. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+479420b0d14d,457D9B0CF71F,"""What about the people who work in car companies?"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+24b71d39940f,457D9B0CF71F,"Well, if we all followed what Bogota is doing and develop shopping districts and renewal companies, I'm sure there will be many jobs available. No matter the pay, you'll still have no worry about your automobile bills, which will help you save a huge amount of money. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9b4203301bab,457D9B0CF71F,"We need to save ourselves from driving and polluting the earth, or else we won't have a great life to live. Blinding smog will cover the sky, and many won't be able to enjoy the rich outside there once was. All we will see are streets instead of parks. We need to stop ourselves from driving too much in order to live to the fullest.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b7d376ae304b,4597FB4E692E,"Have you ever been faced with a boring computer assignment? Maybe you have dreaded coming to school or finishing your homework? As technology is advancing and more of the classroom is found through an electronic device, some students may find themselves losing interest in their daily lessons. What if this could be changed by a system that takes your facial expressions into account and accomodates to your mood? Right when the assignment has begun to lose your interest, this system could sense the change and alter the lesson plan to regain your interest. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+72884fbed759,4597FB4E692E,"The Facial Action Coding System may be valuable and allow for improvement to be made within classrooms and within students. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+271eee0bd023,4597FB4E692E,"Initially, as technology is advancing daily and students find themselves online more often, this system could improve their lessons. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5a7f6c760add,4597FB4E692E,"Electronics as of now are programmed to teach a student however are unable to sense how the student is feeling or how they are actually doing on their assignment. As the author states in the article, ""most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication"" something which computers are unable to detect (para. 6). Not only this, but the author gives an analogy that states ""if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a smilar ad might follow"" and explains that in a classroom, similar techniques can be applied to benefit the student (para. 6). Using this program will allow technology to advance and in turn will benefit the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f8cf7003cc8f,4597FB4E692E,"By the same token, using this sort of technology in the classroom will keep a student engaged during their lessons ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b183fe103ee,4597FB4E692E,"When Dr. Huang describes how this system can engage a student he states, ""[the computer] could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"" and further explains that ""[the system] could modify the lesson"" to acomidate to the students needs (para. 6). In a normal classroom, when the teachers method of teaching is confusing students, the teacher should find a different way of teaching to engage students. The author also explains how the system is able to read six different emotions and can ""identify mixed emotions"" to allow the system to see if their methods are benefitting the student (para. 4). This computer system would be valuable when keeping the students engaged. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+465c8dea82b8,4597FB4E692E,"Finally, this system may change the ways in which many students view school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+88aabcf8a273,4597FB4E692E,"It is no secret that many students dread coming to school, whether it be from stress, bullying, or simply not understanding the subjects. This system can pick up on a fake emotion, the author explains how it can read a ""fake smile"" and that to them ""faces don't lie"" (para. 8). If this system is able to sense when a student is unhappy or angry, this could be used as an advantage in helping the student. Not only this, but the author explains that ""moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but may even help produce them"" (para. 9). Taking both of these statements into account, and allowing them to be incorporated into the classroom, students may enjoy attending school and learning new things. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8bb23abfcd47,4597FB4E692E,"Consequently, this system would be valuable to classrooms and would allow for improvement to be made within schools and the students. Overall, it is evident that computers are unable to read emotions and reciprocate to the individual adequately. This system might prove to reengage students in their learning, and improve their moods altogether. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+02c2c7df68c9,45A87F46D89C,Not using cars or not using cars as much can be extremely benefitial ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ce306c02966c,45A87F46D89C,not only the enviroment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26550e60a301,45A87F46D89C,"also to the health of people 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+119bb2effec1,45A87F46D89C,"Getting excersise is extremely important in modern times heart diesease is a major factor in todays society and that can be easily prevented with minutes of excersise everyday .
+
+The less you drive the more your bound to walk or ride a bike to your destination 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8b00d1c2fe0,45A87F46D89C,"While having completely carless communities can be an inconvinice .
+
+Cutting back on car usage and even using hybrid cars can be benefitial to the enviroment ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+292639024bd6,45A87F46D89C,"Even in the United States cars are becoming less relivant.
+
+Not because they are not useful but because cities are becoming so compact that there is no longer a use to drive cars to stores and shops. The only time people drive is for long distance or to work or school when it is cold or raining ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+968b675601b5,45A87F46D89C,"If I could ride the bus to and from school I would, but, they refuse to pick me up in the mornings so I drive my moms
+
+SUV
+
+istead while im not complaining because I dont have to ride in sticky seats or be constantly harassed by the kid behind me kicking my seat. Driving an
+
+SUV
+
+(which is also extremely hard to park)
+
+is not a very efficient way to get to school ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+935f3006530e,45A87F46D89C,"While I tried walking it was difficult getting to school on time and i was depleeted of energy.
+
+So driving became the most efficient way.     ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+95f54bc1ade8,45C0A94A1668,The new technology is very helpful showing about whats more to a picture or a frame. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+be8d49889432,45C0A94A1668,Why is this important well beacuse people want to know about more about the picture or of what the picture is showing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+753ee594509b,45C0A94A1668,"for example, Mona Lisa smile to not be so serious in the picture imagine having a cute picture but your so serious. You can change that with new tecnology. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cdc1a417c27b,45C0A94A1668,Comperters are very helpful theses days in many ways. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c2a05d45eab0,45C0A94A1668,"For example it can be useful for making payments , searching up information you need , paperwork, photoshop, diffrent apps that are useful on making your life better. Its a better sorce of seaching stuff up learning more about the world and the physics. Theres more to this i mostly use it for searching up information about the topic i want to learn about. Its easier for me beacuse i dont like rreading alot and i can just look up videos instead of having to sit there for an hour looking up information or reading it beacuse reading makes me sleepy. Thats why i think the web is an awsome resorse for people that need to be informed and thought many diffrent things. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d163b57c783,45C0A94A1668,Many people use this method by making there photogrophy work look better than it is. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+da146607809f,45C0A94A1668,Its a very good sorce for people that have the job as a photographer beacuse they will make everything work in many ways. For example if something in the picture gets in the way the computer will show u how to get rid or it instead of doing all the extra stuff on taking a whole lot of pictures that look the same or worst. Why waist your time on doing that instead get the app or the program and get to steping its way better and easier to get pictures that are perfect. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3858e5a7c1e6,45CF27F8EB92,"The future. Everyone wonders what it will look like, what it will be like but that is up to our future generations . The young people today will eventually be our future. They will be the ones we look up to for solutions and ideas. By having extracurricular activities be a must in schools we are only making school systems better and by making school systems better we are making our future better. There are so many fun yet different extracurricular activities for everyone such as dance, student council or debate. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5abd2e60572a,45CF27F8EB92,Schools should make participating in an extracurricular activity mandatory for students  ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3329a1abbf18,45CF27F8EB92,"it will give the students a chance to explore their passions, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+408aeb8634e9,45CF27F8EB92,it will provide them an opportunity to make life-long friends ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf1fafbab96f,45CF27F8EB92,"it will benefit the schools participating. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+7e58ae589326,45CF27F8EB92,"By providing students the chance to participate in extracurricular activities, you are letting them get a head-start in life. By trying out different activities, they will be able to determine which one they like the most and want to pursue as a career. Many students in high school still don't know what career path they want to pursue, but students who had to do an extracurricular will already know which one they prefer to others. Thus, they won't be puzzled by the time they have to choose a career. Additionally, participating in extracurricular activities will help strengthen their resume when they need it. A student who has done multiple extracurricular activities will be preferred to another student who has not done any. Furthermore, my sister, Generic_Name, never knew what career she wanted to pursue until she took a building class as an extracurricular in 9th grade. She instantly fell in love with it and could use that extracurricular class as a bonus on her resume. She is now in her first year at Yale, studying engineering. This shows why extracurricular activities will help students discover their passion. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+31c62b803a64,45CF27F8EB92,"Every year, many new kids will move to the area and come to a new school so providing an additional way to get to know others is needed. The new kid will be able to connect with others that share similar interests and it will make the whole moving process much easier. In addition, having a friend that shares the same interests as you will make your bond much stronger and make you much better friends. This program will also benefit shy kids or students who are more quiet and reserved. It will help them because in school they might be more quiet if they don't feel comfortable or if none of the subjects interest them. However, if they are in an environment where they enjoy what they are doing and are with people like them they will be more likely to branch out. When I was nine, my school required I do a sport. Thus, I decided to do swim team. When I started the sport I was new to town. We had just moved from California to Virginia so I did not have many friends. However, I made many friends quite easily because of swim team. I made friends faster than usual since we shared similar interests. We all liked swimming and we would all have friendly competitions. We even took trips together which made our bond even stronger. We helped each other through hard times. Even though, two of my friends from swim team switched schools I am still very close friends with all of them. The bond we created will last a life time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+53527df27afe,45CF27F8EB92,"It will keep students busy and occupied; thus, they won't get into trouble as much. I was once told that if you are bored, it can often lead to trouble because if you're busy you have no time to make trouble.
+
+Also, by having students do extracurricular activities it will seem as if the school gives off lots of well rounded students who have many skills. This will seem very impressive. Lastly, the school's students will most likely have a higher grade point average (GPA) and better scores in general compared to schools who don't require extracurricular activities. This is because studies show that students who do extracurricular activities such as sports or clubs have done better in academics and will learn time management and balance better than other kids. This is why enforcing extracurricular activities will improve schools. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a7fb29a04c33,45CF27F8EB92,"schools should adopt a new policy of having students preform at least one extracurricular activity. This is a great way to help students find their passion, make new friends and better the schools. Students will be to find an extracurricular that sparks interest for them and hopefully it will turn out to be their career. They will also be able to make strong friendships through this program. It will also ease the anxiety of making friends for new kids. Lastly, the program will benefit schools by making their students more well rounded, increasing the overall GPA of their students and help keep students occupied and out of trouble after school. In fact, all schools in America should decide to make this a requirement. Not only will it make our school systems better but it will also improve our students; which are our future. The students in our schools today will eventually become leaders, officials, activists, doctors, lawyers, actors and politicians. So if this program will better schools and the lives that hold our future then there should be no question about implementing it.                   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+251913fbf9fb,45EBD1AF6D37,"the challenge of exploring venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. however, this nickname, is misleading since venus is actually a planet. In a solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun.
+
+they call venus like the earth twin..
+
+Venus is the closest to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, venus, and mars,our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe ventage pointof Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.
+
+MY ESSAY.
+
+The callenge of exploring venus is one of the biggest points of light in the night sky, these differences is speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars and others times to venus. Because venus is sometimes right aroundthe corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent dioxide blankets venus. Also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature af any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to our sun. astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such ass valleys, mountains, and craters. Imagine a blimp like behicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. However, peering at venus from a ship orbiying or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions bacuse most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendiring standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent dioxide blankets venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+571671032f2f,45EF6A4EDB1A,"Summer projects are no fun, but they are a great way for students to be engaged in their studies over the long summer break. In my experience, whenever I had summer projects given to me by a teacher, I did better in the class because on the first day of school I already had some knowledge of the topic. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bb44f0b4ed49,45EF6A4EDB1A,I think summer projects should be teacher designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bee29ad0071d,45EF6A4EDB1A,"it will make it easier on their students, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d5824c3cf4ab,45EF6A4EDB1A,help them learn about a new topic they never researched before. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+45d091cfb477,45EF6A4EDB1A,"Students are busy in the Summer, witch is why a teacher- designed projects are better for them. It may be summer break, but most students get jobs or go on vacation with their family, this is where a teacher designed project is better. If all the Student has to do is follow the teachers outline instead of coming up with ways to make a unique project on a topic they have never learned of before. The ideal summer project is also not one that is supposed to be tedious, but one that will help student gain the basic knowledge needed for the class. Not a super stressful project that is left for the students to do with no outline or help from the teacher. I think because this is the first time the students are learning about this topic it is better if the teacher makes a template for the students to follow so they do the correct research. It will also take the stress of their chest so they can enjoy a nice summer break but learn at the same time. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a2d33bb6ea99,45EF6A4EDB1A,"Researching a topic you never learned of before is a hard task, especially in the summer witch is why summer projects should be teacher- designed. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+66f82ba3cfc8,45EF6A4EDB1A,"When learning about a new subject it is better if someone is there to help you, instead of jumping into a project. Then you have to do a lot more research and it may not all be correct, and you wont be able to tell because this is your first time learning about the topic. If a teacher was there help guide you through the project it will make the research easier and more reliable. Another benefit is that Students will focus more on the learning part of the project more because they dont have to make their own with the little to no information they know about the topic. I feel the like a whole student- designed project is too stressful for them to do in the summer, because they lack the knowledge and discipline, so if it was teacher orientated it is a guarantee that the students will learn the correct criteria. A teacher- designed project is more beneficial to the kids rather than a student- designed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bba9f7561fa2,45EF6A4EDB1A,"Not everyone agrees with me, some people will say that a student designed project is more beneficial for the kids. They will argue, and say its summer the students should do their own project and do it in their own time. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e746afab5849,45EF6A4EDB1A,"That wouldnt work because they dont know anything about the topic, and they will procrastinate and do it the last week of the summer making it rushed and it wont be beneficial to them at all. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7c8ee145975f,45EF6A4EDB1A,They might also argue that students dont want to be pestered about how teacher want the work to be and it is a time for a little freedom and they can do a fun project that they deigned all by them self. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0c5eb6ca4881,45EF6A4EDB1A,"Pushing creativity is good for students, but in I feel like a summer project is something you do so you can have knowledge of the topic when school starts, instead of something fun youll forget about in a week or two ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b61bf8b30c03,45EF6A4EDB1A,"There are arguments for student based projects but in the end my opinion will still stand that a teacher- designed project is more beneficial for the students.
+
+I feel like teacher- designed projects are the best for students for two reasons, It will make it easier on the students to learn about a new topic they never learned of before, and its easier for them in the summer. Some may feel that this isnt best and a student- designed project is more beneficial, but in the end my opinion will remain the same and that is, that teacher-designed projects are the way to go.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2c44e1c4ef96,46299FE45972,In this story the author is talking about Venus. Alot of people could care less about the planets but its a big part of the world today. In this story its talking about Venus and everything people need too know about it ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c12bcfc147e2,46299FE45972,I think the author in this passage described Venus well. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+671d14ed54e6,46299FE45972,"He/she explained everything about Venus, The size, were its located, how hot it is etc. I think this cause in passage 1,2,3 it gives alot of information on Venus. And the author organized the facts really well by putting alot of facts in each paragraph and focusing on that and giving alot of information on that subject. In paragraph 4 it talks about how Venus is almost like the earth and how maybe one day they would like too visit. This is a huge thing cause if so we could have another planet of life ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fddf32c0a06b,46299FE45972,So in conclusion i think this article was very well planned and had just the right amount of infomation for a average person too learn and know about.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a77694304095,46325F9405AF,"In this essay you will see reasons for the people who think it was created by aliens, and the people who think that it was not created by aliens. You will also see textual evidence for those reasons that we have. In this article we will be talking about "" The Face on Mars"". So here our the reasons for us to think it was created by aliens and for it not to be created by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+77b53f7448b4,46325F9405AF,I believe that the face n mars was not created by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5e690539c9df,46325F9405AF,"I believe that because of how the ""face"" has evolved. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87d1172c4d5b,46325F9405AF,"In 1976 the face looked like a face. In 1998 it started to not look like a face at all. In 2001 it just looked like a rock. So i believe that it was not created by aliens but that it was just something the olanet had made itself. This has certainly got the attention of the people.
+
+The ""Face on Mars"" is not a face. If you look at the pictures from 1976, and 1998, and 2001 and in the text it says that the photo from 2001 is the most recent photo that NASA has. It still looks nothing like a face so since the 2001 picture is the most recent it shows that it is just a natural landform. It is just a natural landform. On Mars there are natural landforms everywhere and the fade away. Here on earth natural landforms are created everyday. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b1d43d7e35f7,46325F9405AF,"This article it also states that the ""Face on Mars"" is really just a mesa ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0883f9424cd,46325F9405AF,"Which proves that the so called ""face"" is not a face and it is just a landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58069969fa24,46325F9405AF,Others still thought it was a face. Those people thought that because of what the article says in parargraph 11. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3679dd852891,46325F9405AF,"In paragraph 11 it states that "" As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground, Egyptian-style pyramids, or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" So because of what they had said in that paragraph people believed that they had saw a face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0eb91448cb6b,46325F9405AF,"Those are the reasons for why people had thought that the ""Face on Mars"" was an actual face. Also the reasons why people thought that it was just a natural landform instead.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d6df96852d91,465E5E04956D,"Have you ever been on a trip to cross the Alantic Ocean? A man named luke Bomberger has, and did sixteen times ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e71c439e3828,465E5E04956D,You can do this by joining the Seaging Cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f3aded00b0f1,465E5E04956D,you can see famous monuments and go through the Panama Canal ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55f1cefcd077,465E5E04956D,you can also experince the work the cownboys used to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc8c583ef415,465E5E04956D,Joining the this program you can see the most coolest monuments you ever seen! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c341ac4ac5cd,465E5E04956D,"You can see castles and towers on your way to Europe. You may even go in them, and see the gloriuos sightings you'll ever seen in you life. This is what your going to see if you go on this program.
+
+When your on your way to Europe, you will go through the Panama Canel. You can see what the Peoples houses look like, how they live, and what they eat. You can also see how the canael is shaped and how it was formed. That is what is going to happen when your going through the Panama Canel. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8e8edb70ae90,465E5E04956D,your going to work like the cowboys did in the old days ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e5f78a333c8,465E5E04956D,You will be feeding animals and you might be hourly reporting to the captian just like Luke Bomberger! That is all the work you will be doing on this program. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ceda4a94d237,465E5E04956D,And that concludes the program of Seaging Cowboys. Hope you can join the program and help through our journey. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+69da163886dd,46607966C5C2,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author talks and describes to us this new technology that can detect how you feel and can tell you about your emotions just by looking at your facial traits. It identifies six basic emotions-hapiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2e07405c3426,46607966C5C2,This kind of a technology has many good and positive effects attached to it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5f58621accdc,46607966C5C2,This technology allows us to know how a person is feeling or allows us to know how a person was feeling when a picture was taken. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f147fbf8c136,46607966C5C2,"For example,""She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent happy."" This evaluation of emotion is from the painting of Mona Lisa, painted by Leonardo Da Vinci. Even though it was just a picture or a painting, this technology identified all sorts of emotion. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ff30e6c59ed,46607966C5C2,There could be several other instances when this new emotion-recognition sofware could come in handy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55bc7d750797,46607966C5C2,"For instance, we could tell if our friend is happy or sad, if they are lying or not, if they are disgusted or not. This could either strenghten our friendship or maybe break our friendship and so with this, we can detect/identify a lot of things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c4e0c4f8b60,46607966C5C2,This can be very useful for the media to detect when someone is lying. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b95383c8d38c,46607966C5C2,"This new invention tells us that faces never lie. For example,""these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being thruthful."" This can help the media or the news channel's to give the most accurate information and all the bias can stop. This on the other hand has many other benefits to it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58ceab28f34d,46607966C5C2,This new technology can solve a lot of historic and present questions. It just uses your facial traits to recognize your emotions. This in turn leads to the finding of answers to several other questions that have not been answered or have unsure answers to them. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+678574c1da9e,4662057D0A77,Many people claim having a phone while driving isn't dangerous. Nowadays accidents happen due to cell phones. We live in an age when many of us are excited by a call or text that we can't wait to answer. Texting while driving is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion. It goes without saying that driving with a mobile phone is one of the most important issues facing us today. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+439ace7360aa,4662057D0A77,"First of all, it is worth considering that phones shouldn't be allowed on peoples hands while driving ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e34ba09cb892,4662057D0A77,Secondly drivers must have their phones on a phone holder to prevent getting pulled over and prevent an accident ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+716ea04ac89f,4662057D0A77,Thirdly you must be focused while driving if you have passengers on board because you're putting their lives at risk. Therefore you shouldnt be holding your phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f871943fec20,4662057D0A77,"Another factor to consider is not just your cell phone but anything that distracts you like food, advertisements etc, can cause an accident ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f5a81ca824f,4662057D0A77,Last but not least that text or call can wait. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e7af6569df4,4662057D0A77,"According to experts, more than 3,000 teens die to texting while driving ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2eca4da34e7,4662057D0A77,Research has found that driving while texting is six times more dangerous than drunk drivers. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b55e3516e7e,4662057D0A77,There are those who argue that phones should be allowed while driving. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+df4df26992e3,4662057D0A77,"For example if an emergency occurs and someone is trying to get a hold of you, you would need your cell phone to stay in contact. Another example is if you are lost you can call someone for directions ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7c78fd00921e,4662057D0A77,There is always a solution to everything like having a car holder and putting gps rather than calling someone. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1f6bbd4f8898,4662057D0A77,"Although most drivers are in the age of driving, teens aren't supposed too. Teens have led to one of the reasons accidents happen. Despite the fact that they aren't supposed to be driving they are very irresponsible. On the other hand, adults are supposed to teach their kids the right way to drive, to always drive focus never look at other accidents deals in the street while driving always look ahead. However teens should drive with an adult past 7 pm. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2c213c0bcfe,4662057D0A77,"As far as im concerned, we should always drive with a phone holder to prevent an accident. From my point of view accidents happen due to several other reasons but mostly because of our phones. Weighing both sides of the argument people have their own opinion on whether or not cells are distracting ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f3c2b0c20c0e,4662057D0A77,"My opinion about cell phones while driving is very dangerous, we shouldn't be allowed to grab our phones while driving. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d42ec240d8ee,46A92C87B030,Summer projects are required in some schools so that students can keep learning over their break. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7a8c5ea7d9bd,46A92C87B030,I believe these said projects should be designed by the students and not by their teachers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fe42da19c30b,46A92C87B030,One reason is students should be able to learn what they want ,Claim,Effective,,,
+093475b3b560,46A92C87B030,Another reason is the students will most-likely make their project shorter to complete which means more time to enjoy summer break. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7aecfe800a25,46A92C87B030,"
+Whenever you have a project it's always more exhaustive to complete when you are not passionate about the subject. When you are able to pick and choose the topic of what you learn though, you get inspired and are excited to do the project. I think that it is pertinent for students to have a strong passion for their work, it makes it far more enjoyable to do. For example, in my middle school, I was able to design my own project over the summer, and for the first time I actually had fun working, unlike my teacher made projects ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+14aa9f2681cb,46A92C87B030,It is highly necessary for the youth to learn attributes and skills they are personally interested in so when they get a job they know what their doing and are not filled with useless knowledge they don't need. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d3154c280f5f,46A92C87B030,"I also think that having a break is warranted if you are working hard, it helps rejuvenate and recollect yourself. Students need breaks and giving them an unnecessarily long project to do over their vacation takes that away from them. Families are also busy over break with traveling and seeing family members. Most of the time students lack the time to really put their best effort into their work ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+938a82958b77,46A92C87B030,"If you let students decide their workload and limit they will have a favorably less stressful summer vacation, giving them the rightful break they deserve. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7e4482234947,46A92C87B030,"I strongly believe that all schools that require a summer project should let their students decide what they want to accommodate their knowledge with not the teachers. Still, on the other hand, people might want teachers to create the projects, but students don't usually learn anything valuable to their selves if they aren't interested in the subject. So in conclusion, students should be permitted to mold their own summer break projects. Then at the end of the day, everyone is satisfied and able to learn what they want, letting students enjoy the vacation they are given. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1156bbf4f36c,476E07AEA488,"The author say that venus is called the ""evening star"". venus is actually a planet. venus is the second sun planet from the sun. also venus is the twin of earth. venus is one of the closest planets to earth. both has the same density and size. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+258809a4d862,476E07AEA488,"venus mission is was unmanned and no spacecraft survived the landing no spaceships arrived on venus for ""3 decades ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1dd606f39bea,476E07AEA488,venus is an challenging planet for humans to study ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+737f41a77776,476E07AEA488,planet temps are up to 800 degrees fahrenheit. the atmospheric pressure is is 90 times greater .venus has the hottest surface tempture then any planet there is. it presents additional impedimits like natural desaters .for example strong eartquakes and erupting valcanoes . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2130958d726c,476E07AEA488,Mean while NASA is working on ways to study venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a8ba2ccbef9,476E07AEA488,"for examples ,some simplified elctronics made of silicons carbide habe been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of benus surface and have lastd three weeks in such conditions"". they've also been looking back at old technologycalled mechanicsl computers. Those items were invented in the 1800's .played a role during the 1940's during world war ll .the materials made caculations by using gear and levers. none used electronics ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a6e5c7b9d0e,476E07AEA488,meeting the challenge presented by venus has value because human curiosity will likely lead into many equal intimidating endeavors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+196de7aa6408,477BCBA4035E,Throughout reading this article I thought it provided very good and extensive research. Although I did see some major issues with the leading point of the passage. This author provided very good research but the research and evidence throughout the entire article controdicted their main message. ,Position,Effective,,,
+92d36975aeed,477BCBA4035E,"To make this article better, more evidence on why studying venus is benefical should be provided to support their claim. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+305a2685bf39,477BCBA4035E,"In this article the evidence they use for example: ""These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals"" and also ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus"" supports the controdicting claim that going to Venus is too dangerous with too many complications. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4fdad977d834,477BCBA4035E,"Throughout the whole passage the author states many reasons on why it's too dangerous to go to Venus and all the complications that would happen if going there. They also show all the major problems with NASA's idea of a solution, but never came up with their own possible idea of a solution. This leads you to believe that the author is against going to Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+744e9dc77afe,477BCBA4035E,"I dont disagree that going to Venus will gain us insight on the planet, spark imagination, and create innovation ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b1d1f75fd2bd,477BCBA4035E,but the author's claim needs to be more supported and obvious throught the passage. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+413e5eefe93a,477BCBA4035E,Some good things about this passage is that they do provide great evidence and research. They provide input from NASA and NASA's insight on the whole thing and a possible solution. They also provide facts about the atmosphere and about the conditions of the planet. Them providing all this evidence helps the reader themselves have almost enough information to come up with their own opinion on the topic. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+4bd998928483,477BCBA4035E,I still stand by this article needing much more information on why and how we could go to Venus safe and affectively. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c64b49704ec,477BCBA4035E,"Overall this article's information and research was great and really did inform me about the planet, but the conclusion ruiened it all. The whole time (paragraphs 1-7) the author lead all the readers to believe that going to Venus has too many dangers and isnt in our best interest, yet the conclusion stated that going to Venus would be a great oppurtunity and that ""Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation"". If the passage had evidence all throught that going to Venus is beneficial, it would be a perfect article but i was all around confused when I found out the author was all for going to Venus and it ruiened and confused the whole article.          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0849d5b0ce3d,47953D11C79C,"In The Challenge of Exploring Venus , the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cb3aaab3534c,47953D11C79C,its the ''Evening Star '' and its similar to earth and often referred to as it's twin. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15ebeffc7c6d,47953D11C79C,Even though venous is dangerous its a mystrious planet to look out for and its the second planet to the sun.'' ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0597b77f762d,47953D11C79C,Atronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well may once have been the most earth like planet in our soloar system''. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4cd87f97008,47953D11C79C,long ago venus probably was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth''. Till these day venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys mountains and craters. Venus can be our nearest optio for a planetary visit. Whats the value of returning to Venus if the mission can be both safe and scientifically productive? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a21364b90754,47953D11C79C,NASA has thought of sending humans to study venus to see how the conditions are up there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91a3e80b8a1e,47953D11C79C,However the conditions are not easy but its survivable for humans. Its the risk to take because venus its fastnacting to discover and see what life is up there? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+358a4ab61126,47953D11C79C,In conclusion of the challenge of exploring venus it has value ''not because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.'' The travels on earth and beyond should take no limits by dangers and doubts but should meet and risk to the ends of earth imagination and innovation. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+50ce83f49469,479B6050859E,The  main  idea  of  the  articles  is  about  the  adavantages  of  limiting  car  usage .The writers  explain  how  by limting  car usuage  it  can  help  us  out. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+fda6943d8a99,479B6050859E,There  are  many adavantages  of  limting  car  usage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8cd770e43aa0,479B6050859E,One  of  the  most  important  adavantage  of  limting  car  usage  is  that  it  would  be lowing  the  pollution  by  lowing  the  pollution  it  clear  the  air  way  around  the  gobal city ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c10b3c266ee,479B6050859E,"""Congestion was down  60  percent  in  the  capital  of  france  after  fivedays  of  intensifying  smog.""smog  by  meaning  pollution  went  down  just  60  percent  in  five  days. Thats  a  great  adavantage  just  by  limting  car  usuage. In  source  number 1  explains that "" Passenger  cars  are  responsible  for  12  percent  of  greenouse  gas emissions  in  Europe.. and up  to  50  perecnt  in  some  car-intensive  areas  in  the  Untied States."" We  as  a  country  shoud  lower  that  and  the  best  way  is  to  limting  car usuage . Limting car usage is one of te some advantges to lowering pollution ( greenhouse gas, smog). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0be86e854b9,479B6050859E,By limiting car usage it can make a alot adavantges like bulidng better communites in soby by limting car usage there like place way closer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80f262d371d5,479B6050859E,"."" in this new approach stores are places a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway"". this mean we will don't have dependent on cars to take us to places that we can walk to or ride bikes to. In source number 3 by bogota limting are use ""Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rus our restritions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shoping districts have cropped up"". this is just making a better communite just by limiting car usage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0e6f3768d6b,479B6050859E,they are many adavantages to limitng car usuage we shoud just have a car free day it would have so many chances of making the Untied States are better place a better country that is already is.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+53948ccd98d5,47CAD052900E,Extracurricular activities are great but do we need them? The principal deciding we must participate in at least one is not well thought upon. Us as students are not all the same and live very different life styles. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+85765a3e3352,47CAD052900E,I disagree with the principals actions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+11d5d3bb4544,47CAD052900E,there is no time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ed32d06ad2f,47CAD052900E,some families can not afford it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90e057f97eb1,47CAD052900E,most can not even get a way there! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73090ce83e19,47CAD052900E,"I say there is no time because students have homework, jobs, or even take care of a family member. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+462f3f11e887,47CAD052900E,Teens do sports if they want to have fun. A percentage of teens do not enjoy sports. There are even the teens that want to do sports but can't because their parents are working all the time! I am one of those teens. Most parents are busy so it is not us teens being lazy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a53cc20405d5,47CAD052900E,a lot of families have no money! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e318904766bc,47CAD052900E,"By ""no money"" I don't mean the have none at all, I am saying that they need the extra money for food, gas, clothing, etc. Playing sports or being in a extracurricular activity costs money. That money can go to better Things. Having that little bit of extra money is what is keeping some families off the streets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+059299fed56e,47CAD052900E,"No money? No car! Along with having no money and no time, you have no way to get there! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b67aef51f14a,47CAD052900E,"If a students parents can not pick them up they can't go. A lot of students are only children so they do not have an older sibling to pick them up. Even if students are old enough to drive it is very unlikely for them to have their own vehicle. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a291ed2f2f9a,47CAD052900E,"No time, no money and no way to get to your extracurricular activity means you would get kicked out of it. These are my reasons for disagreeing with the principal. If you can't or don't want to, you shouldn't have to. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f47473a965d8,4801AC90F66F,""" Attention students, participate in at least one extracurricular activity,"" said my principal. '
+
+""One of these days again?"" ""I hate this school, we do this every week."" Generic_Name why do you like doing this so much?"" ""Hes letting us play sports, work on the year book, and even have free talking time."" Generic_Name said. Out of nowhere,
+
+""Generic_Name and Generic_Name come here!""
+
+Me and Generic_Name looked at each other and said 'where in trouble' We went to Mr. Generic_Name Office and he asked
+
+""are you boys going to do any activity's?' We were shaking harder than ever. ""Yes sir ""Generic_Name said, Me and Generic_Name headed to the basketball court and there were no ball's, ""its Generic_Name"" I said, Generic_Name was very mad, ""Im done getting bullied by him!"" ""We have to confront him Cory."" ""OK lets do it"" I said.
+
+""Are you sure you want to do this Generic_Name?' ""Yes I will not getting bullied by him again."" We walked up to him, ""give us a ball Generic_Name"" he laughs ""play me for one."" ""OK two on one."" Generic_Name said,
+
+""OK nerd"" with a smile on his face. Generic_Name gets ball first, game to five
+
+First possession Generic_Name loses the ball I pass to Generic_Name and he hits the three,""score two to zero Generic_Name"" i said. "" Yeah yeah play ball"" Generic_Name hits me for a layup, but Generic_Name was too fast we kept passing back and forth until Generic_Name got tired. A loud noise I heard before I shot, I turned around and seen Generic_Name passed out on the floor. ""Generic_Name did we go to hard?"" i asked, ""No he got what he deserved.""
+
+Generic_Name said
+
+We went to Mr. Generic_Name office and told him what happened and
+
+I was shocked. He is suspending us for seven days so i said, ""I dont like fun Friday Because something bad is always happening just take it out!"" ""I'm trying to do nice things for the school its better than sitting down and doing work on Frid-"" ""No its not I will rather do work!"" ""Generic_Name do you agree with me?"" ""No"" said Generic_Name ""I like doing fun Friday better than doing work just like Generic_Name said,you are a nerd."" I left the office and went to the bathroom and cried. ""Its OK all of us have friendship problems"" ""Generic_Name is that you?"" ""Yes, i'm sorry about all them years ago when i bullied you and Generic_Name."" i thought thats what a friendship was,"" in a sad voice. ""Can we be friends?"" he asked. ""Yeah we can"" i said with courage.
+
+Me and Generic_Name went back to the office and I said my apologies to Mr. Generic_Name and Generic_Name."" I guess fun Friday's are not so bad after all."" 'I will unsuspend you guy's time, and keep you in school'"" said Mr. Generic_Name. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ee114dd904e,4801AC90F66F,I now know to agree to this idea and respect my principal choices and rules. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2c941f9614df,4801AC90F66F,"I learned that doing activity's can bring you together with so many people its basicly changing how we act around or with others. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6467d50d19e4,48984D541995,"Scientists and more specifically astronomers are extremley fascinated in Earth's sister planet, Venus, as it is similar to Earth in certain ways, and is a close enough distance for travel. Venus was believed to once be very similar to Earth in terms of its geology, so therefore scientists are interested in discovering how the features have changed. However, the author of ""The Challenge Exploring Venus,"" explains the great dangers that the planet offers for both humans and technology to explore the planet. The act of returning to Venus seems impossible due to the risks, although the insight that is wanted to be gained on the planet could lead to ""intimidating endeavors."" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d12d181e2075,48984D541995,The author claims that the studying of Venus is still an active pursuit despite the dangers that come along with it. The claim is supported well ,Position,Effective,,,
+ed933118f64c,48984D541995,by using previous experiences of missions and spacecrafts ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76d804f06120,48984D541995,"as well as shocking factual statistics that catch the readers attention. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ac9b605e7d0,48984D541995,The author tells the story of previous missions that have been sent to Venus in hopes to persuade the audience that the planet's harsh conditions are too intense for even high technology to withstand ,Claim,Effective,,,
+43cc74a1a115,48984D541995,"He mentions, ""...no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" This quote uses ethos to ensure the reliablity of the author, and to emphasize that scientists are truly struggling to develop devices that are well enough developed to explains the dangers. The understanding that technology made by scientists who have succesfully researched across the milky way cannot withstand Venus's circumstanes demonstrates how dangerous the planet is. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b9a6916066ad,48984D541995,The use of statistics is presented by the author to take a more logical view on their argument to prove the dangers of Venus ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f08495b3bdb7,48984D541995,"The article mentions that ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent blankets Venus."" As carbon dioxide is waste product of human respiration, the inhalation of this gas would be very dangerous for life to visit Venus. It also says that ""On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Without shelter that can withold these extreme temperatures and amounts of pressure, the human body, similar to the spacecrafts, would be lucky to survive for more than a few hours. These numbers support the author's claim to focus on the horrific dangerous of exploring Venus to present a logical standpoint on this issue. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+92a1222240d3,48984D541995,"Throughout the article, it suggests that studying Venus is still a worthy mission for astronomers, however, the dangers that come along with these missions are extremely dangerous and life-threatening. The author mentions the curiosity that scientists have involving Earth's sister planet, and the desire to still visit Venus regardless of the harsh conditions. With the article's use of both previous experiences of missions and spacecrafts, as well as shocking factual statistics of Venus, the claim is very strongly supported with evidence.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7fd5104fe80f,490867E5D019,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Schools argue whether projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed. They both have benefits and different impacts on students. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d61624d22888,490867E5D019,"However, summer projects should be teacher-designed, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7313804dd678,490867E5D019,teachers can integrate what they will teach ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f6a34767ee59,490867E5D019,they also have professional experience. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5f2b9ba5fe87,490867E5D019,"
+One main reason summer projects should be teacher-designed is that teachers can integrate what they will be teaching. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c009a36338f7,490867E5D019,"A small, but very important thing teachers have in common is that they have a lesson plan. A lesson plan is what teachers utilize to understand what curriculum they will teach and how they will teach it. As a result, the teacher can use the curriculum as their foundation of the project. For example, the International Baccalaureate, IB, program requires students to complete a Summer Reading Project. As an IB student, I had to complete it this past summer. We had a list of books to choose from, and we had to write an essay about the message of the book and make a poster about what we learned from the book. What I didn't realize, was that the book had a connection to what we were going to learn in class. The project helped the students make a connection to the class and learn faster and more efficiently. This results would not be possible, if a student designed the project so this is why summer project should be designed by a teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8fe669e4578b,490867E5D019,"Another reason summer projects should be teacher-designed is, because they have more professional experience than students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e72775b915b5,490867E5D019,"Teachers most go to college to become teachers and be hired by a school. This means: they have a degree on education, are certified to be teachers, and they understand the subject better than students. In addition, they have experience from previous years and students. So they understand that students learn differently. Consequently, they can come up with a method to make the project educative and impactful for every student; regardless, of how different they learn. For these reasons, the summer projects should be teacher designed. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b310da4cafe,490867E5D019,"Some may argue that summer projects should be student-designed, because students understand each other. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+59e17ef959ee,490867E5D019,While this statement is true it is bias. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0d5bdd03df9d,490867E5D019,"It's bias, because students are often with their friend group which often understand each other. On the other hand, friend groups are all different, meaning they have different beliefs and values. Another reason, the statement is bias is that students have different learning styles. A student can be a fast learner and don't need to study as hard as others students; however, another student might need more reinforcement to learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+87ad4e3e364a,490867E5D019,"So if a student was to design a project it would be based on their personal preference and not about everyone. Concluding, that summer projects should not be designed by students because they can be bias. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fac8af765703,490867E5D019,"As a conclusion, summer projects have to be teacher-designed. It must be designed by teachers, so students can learn efficiently and effectively. Also, it can help the teacher understand and get to know the student through their summer project.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d48ce05e5aae,495DF8DE2896,"In German suburb, this is a ""car-free"" place, this may seem shocking to many for people who use cars to go where they need to everyday...  Car ownership is only allowed in two places; large parking garages at the edge of development, where a car owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.  Some say that it's good for the earth due to the bad pollution.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7c176e1dea7,495DF8DE2896,Some countries around the world is trying to put an end to polluting the earth and one of the ways they did that was to ban driving cars.  People would think that as crazy but it is actually a brilliant idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d9b79d694244,495DF8DE2896,it would lessen the Ozone whole that is being crerated by polluting.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+142426b0a30a,495DF8DE2896,We actaully need this Ozone hole to protect us from the dangerous sun rays.  ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5812ab64b143,495DF8DE2896,"My honest opinions on this subject matter is I think it's creative in a way but I don't like it just because of how much I have to travel everyday.  First I go to school of course, then I go home then I drive to practice which is a 30 minute drive, that also means driving all the way home too.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ed3bb56f2f44,495DF8DE2896,it saves gas money since gas prices are going up soon due to economy.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ab7a80451c6,495DF8DE2896,"A mother of two who is also a media trainer name Heidrun Walter gave her honest opinion of this ""car-banning"".  ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.""  Another man name David Gold berg, an offical of Transportation for America said ""All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd1a039017ea,495DF8DE2896,Although our development is changing it may have a good effective role on our earth.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a77772d5259f,496EB21D745B,If I were a scientist at NASA I will not believed alien because most of scientists said aliens are not real and I think they just made up of alien. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f534fe86c445,496EB21D745B,"A face on Mars is maybe when the wind blow the dust it trun that face or when they goes there they died and their dead body face is still there. But it's really interesting because that face is really big and it image 3 times bigger than th epixel size. But I believed there are not alien in the other planets or in earth because alien are not real but I have to makesure that I have to ask more question to the smartest scientist and ask about how did that face happen and how are we gonna prove about that. I have to ask more question about that too and they said that face look like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian style pyrmaids or even small shacks, you could see what they were. Some of them don't believe it because they don't see it and they just guess that answer. But when I looked at the picture I think I saw that crown and their face look shiney and in 2001 that face look destroy . I don't believe in aliens but if there was some aliens in that planet they might made that face too and they hid away from that face. I wish I see that picture for real and take some picture and prove it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42bd13d86039,497E63C46A84,I believe that this computer would work wonders in a classroom. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8c9412fbd192,497E63C46A84,"It could allow teachers to know which of the children in the classroom are having problems understanding the lesson, allowing the teacher to help them more. This could also help other studys of the human anatomy, as it shows how facial expressions are done and also what they mean. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff9ad11f2256,497E63C46A84,"In the famous, ""Mona Lisa"" painting, many people observe her smile and think that she is being forced to smile, and that she is actually scared, frighted, or just angry. Using this computer means that we could debunk/prove this theory. This could also solve crimes, some that have not been solved to this day! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bfd932e0a6ce,497E63C46A84,"This computer could also help with crimes as it could show that if a suspect is making a certain facial expression, they are lying or telling the truth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5cff00fe58d,497E63C46A84,"This could help police catch people who are breaking the law, but not put others in prison for nothing. This computer could help with these problems that occur in the real world, and it would save lives in the process ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+303cf65dea35,497E63C46A84,"This would be very helpful in peoples daily lives, and it could help people who have problem such as mental health. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+136679b1358e,497E63C46A84,"If a child is slower than other children, this test could help decide whether or whether not these children need the extra help. If they do need help, this machine could even put them in the correct classes! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d2aef4c1a4f,49D71438EA8F,The story of Making Mona Lisa Smile is about a Prof named Thomas Huang making a computer that can tell your emotions and the way you are feeling that day. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a290d3807d42,49D71438EA8F,You might not be the mood for anything and the computer can tell when your bored or not feeling anything it will modify the way it work so you will be in a better mood i think its great. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+60b76cd7c50d,49D71438EA8F,Beacuse kids might not fall asleep in class as much if thcomputer sees it and will fix it and it will help whats wrong with people ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f18e7febc30,49D71438EA8F,Part of me say its a bad idea becuase most people dont like talking about their emotions so that will make things worse if a computer does it and feel their emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a49b33e2dc2a,49D71438EA8F,I would say no to it becuase i myself and like telling my emotions about things and dont a computer telling me about them ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d54cededda9a,49ED588E79B1,"""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" Is a famous painting that includes this new technology that tells your emotion. In this famous painting she seems to be smiling in this case she really wasn't. With this technology you can see all 44 muscles. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+64d412b7dfcd,49ED588E79B1,"In the article it says that, ""the computer can classified six basic emotions which include happines,suprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness."" This shows how a computer can do so much just by seeing you're face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7512780e93a6,49ED588E79B1,With all this they want people to identify a students emotion. This is valuable because when a student is doing their work they could get confused. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f40c4adec7dc,49ED588E79B1,With this new system you can caculate their emotions and quickly identify if a student is confued. This can really help a teacher with their lessons. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+269828cadef7,49ED588E79B1,Another way that you can tell is by looking yourself in the mirror. You have muscular units that help you identify how your felling whether your happy or sad. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fb58db5a4eec,49ED588E79B1,"This famous painting is Mona Lisa in which you find her smiliing can demonstrate her emotions while they did the painting. In the article it shows that, ""shes 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful and 2% angry."" With this Information a computer can recognize your emotions. Mona Lisa wasn't really happy but in the painting you see her with a small smile. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e0f3ab9311f,49ED588E79B1,This technology is helpful and useful in so many ways. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+aff6f4b4cd47,49EE396B474E,Honestly truth be told there is a valuable cause in this because alot of technology today will ask you to rate this website or did you like this song?.The computer will read only what u tell them. Although the computer cannot read how you really feel because sometimes people lie about what they do and dont like. So just because you rate that website a 7 doesnt mean you like it you might just want them to think its a good website. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ed8d364a3624,49EE396B474E,The computer would have to be very reliable and trusting for it to be valuable. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7da78d38e3cd,49EE396B474E,The students these days is hard to tell because they just don't care anymore. If they don't care then there is no way to tell if they like something or not. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7747c2a2a85,49EE396B474E,"In the article it says ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is call and ""action unit."" In that paragraph its technically talking about how the computer will recognize facial expressions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ee3574c65ab,49EE396B474E,I feel like that would take alot of work for computer technicians to actually put more devices in a computer just to see what people think about them. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3dd2383efd60,49EE396B474E,So in my opinion no I don't think they should use the technology to read emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dd7d48056eae,49EE396B474E,it will make things more expensive and less people will buy them. Some people wouldn't like technology to read their emotions because alot of times people wont be angry at the computer they would be mad because the computer is trying to tell them how they are feeling.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b5338910ecfa,4A4A502DE26A,In this story the author is talking about how humas have not made it on the planet of Venis. At least that we know about ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+64e99e1a2e53,4A4A502DE26A,The article said that scientits think there may be life or have been life on the planet ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+218bc6f4a092,4A4A502DE26A,"With scientists thinking if there is something up there on the planet there is a good chance that they will be able to find out soon with all the technology we have today.
+
+With all the things we have today I think we will find something on venus. If we do then there is a fact that there is aliens that are alive, unless they are just like us but from another planet. And that planet is closer to the sun than earth. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00d3953bff85,4A4A502DE26A,I think with all the things in the article we will find somthing or that there was something there on venus at some point. It could of been a trillion years ago or there is still life on it today we will just have to find out. Time is the only thing that we have on are side. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+418ba4eb4b8f,4A5760917477,"The distinct responsibility of having students learn rests on the very shoulders of teachers throughout nine out of the twelve months that are in a year, so the students should direly be permitted to design how they learn over the three month break that they get. This three month break, summer, to most students, is a time where they can finally let go of all their responsibilities and worries and leave them right in the classroom. Most do not think twice about what they have learned over the past semester, but instead are already steps ahead on planning what events. attractions, and/or vacations they may embark on. Teachers still try to make an effort for learners to still store information they have learned and even try add on to it by assigning projects that are aimed directly for students to complete by the next school year. More often than not, projects are long-term, and that causes the student to be continuously involved with the material and truly grasp the knowledge coming at them. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b51c95171735,4A5760917477,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+566fa4843edc,4A5760917477,"they are more likely to retain the knowledge, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+65c2947a3774,4A5760917477,"it lets them express their creativity and uniqueness, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+215bd547c6fa,4A5760917477,they would be more inclined to complete the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d1742f22fd13,4A5760917477,"Every student will be likely to design a different version of the project and there will be no barriers to how they can let their creative minds visualize the project and ultimately complete it. Having them let their brain-storming abilities to take over and conceptualize on how they will continue to tackle the task at hand, truly sets them up for active learning and teaches them very useful future skills that they will use. Varying on the topic, students can create physical projects such as posters or tri-folds, or they can create online projects such as graphs or tables. Having the ability to express your mind is something that can not be so easily undermined or the very learning that is so emphasized in today's educational system will have failed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b42f03086cd,4A5760917477,"To actually learn an individual needs to be able to understand the knowledge that is going through their mind as they work on assignments, and there is truly no better way to learn than to self-learn while working on a project. Unlike tests or any other sort of assignment, projects give students more of a chance to actually learn rather than just memorizing knowledge for a sort period of time and then forgetting it the second they turn in the assignment. Making sure that their mind is continuously being subjected to complete the assignment over a long period of time consequently burns the knowledge into their brain and helps them to better retain it. Having students do the designing portion of the assignment as well would lead to even more learning due to them needing to know the content first and then being able to correctly complete it with no errors. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+392e32926aea,4A5760917477,Producing the best possible work can only come through the prosperity of motivation and the willingness to do the work. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+79cfc0185393,4A5760917477,"Being able to learn and retain knowledge, express themselves in countless ways, and want to actually complete the assignment are all reasons why student-designed projects prove to be more resourceful and efficient in the life of a typical student. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3b70d07eb734,4A5760917477,"However, teacher-designed projects are helpful too, they teach exactly what the teacher would teach them in class which gives learners an understanding of the content from the teachers perspective and could possibly give them knowledge on material they do not know. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+290e3a35ee27,4A5760917477,"Learning is retaining, if the students do not retain any of the knowledge they are just trying to complete another teacher-given assignment, and they are not truly learning. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e8df2d1e7c0d,4A7EE66B4695,Don't you ever think of joining the Seagoing Cowboys? Well you should consider it. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7563faa2b8a3,4A7EE66B4695,Everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it's a great idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+df9e3d769576,4A7EE66B4695,you can learn so much stuff ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+efe9e9429c53,4A7EE66B4695,have a wonderful time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09c0bbf0fb64,4A7EE66B4695,Joining the Seagoing Cowboys can be a terrific idea because you will have adventurous lives and so much fun! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb9226f7ca48,4A7EE66B4695,"Luke had said"" The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,"" He says."" Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,"" he says."" So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.""You will travel a lot and see so many places. You could also try new thing like the food. Their are so much cultures, and you will get to see many more you may also try and wear the clothes they wear, and do stuff like they are used to doing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3dc0186d0f6,4A7EE66B4695,If you join the Seagoing Cowboys it will be educational and you will end up finding yourself having a wonderful time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5e9c8db6fe7,4A7EE66B4695,"You will be looking forward to joining the Seagoing Cowboys, you won't even notice that the time flies by quickly. You may learn many stuff because you will be traveling to so many places, you won't even have to worry about gettiing lost because your team members will accompany you and, you'll even get supplies, if you need help they will help you they are really nice people and you don't need to have a worry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+acb391134fbf,4A7EE66B4695,"Reuniting with the Seagoing Cowboys could be wonderful, you will have a great and adventurous trip. If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you won't even realize that the time flies by because of the wonderful time you'll be having. I think everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it will be educational and you will help many people that need help and meet many people because, of the World War II and you will be able to experience outdoor natures that way you are not stuck inside the house playing video games or watching TV
+
+and instead help those that are in need. What places would you visit if you wnet to China? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2542334e3d0b,4ACC669C808C,Did you know earth had a twin? Venus is earths twin but they are not idencitlea twins they are quit the diffrent. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+2e49515e8533,4ACC669C808C,Venus is an extraorandraiy planet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+34ce4d3b4182,4ACC669C808C,the atmosphere is almost all carbon dioxide so we would not be able to breath. Its avrage tempchure is 800 degrees fahrenheit so yeah be sure to bring your swim suit for a tan but wait theres more with the rain you will feel amazing and just melt away because all the rain is acid ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ce92de75f71,4ACC669C808C,Now reschers want to explore Venus because they think long ago venus was just like earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+232b41195f1c,4ACC669C808C,"It has mauntian ranges and vallys. ""Long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth today. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+229d217b65c6,4ACC669C808C,We cant get on Venus because we dont have tech or metals that can stand the harsh enviroment of Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd89ace2dceb,4ACC669C808C,Of course we have little info because we can orbet around venus safely but this can only give us so much info. You would think oh wjy dont you just take picuters. Well you know all that acid rain i told you about well there are thick clouds around Venus all the time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc78ad7f2482,4ACC669C808C,You migh think we are at a dead end on trying to explore Venus but if you think that you are right. NASA needs to be able to form new techonagly before we can do anything else on Venus. That is a challenge NASA has accetpiced is to keep trying for Venus.  ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8712b243c548,4AE962B7BDAA,I don't think that this is valuable for students in a classroom just to read their emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7778bac1c396,4AE962B7BDAA,It invades their privacy on if they want to share whats going on in their life or not ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3249d3c19867,4AE962B7BDAA,The students can share if they want to but they should't have their emotions identify by a computer and have their teacher to see what results came in for their emotions ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2dcdb082e91b,4AE962B7BDAA,"In the article it states that ""we humans perform this same impressive ""calculations"" everyday"" when actually you just sense it or study their face to see which emotion you can see through their eyes or facial expressions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7626702265,4AE962B7BDAA,We don't need a computer to detect our emotions when we could say how were feeling and not have a computer tell for us ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8001eae58718,4AE962B7BDAA,"In the article it states that ""Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b9375531ece,4AE962B7BDAA,I pretty much don't beileve a computer can detect emtions from our faces when we could use a computer for many other things instead of emotions. What about our other emotions? gulity? curious? love? etc. How exactly can a computer detect our emotions? When a real human can detect it by the look of our face and talking about it ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+437002998511,4AE962B7BDAA,Yea it might have some good sides to it for crimes and all that ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+b5e0ec19bd75,4AE962B7BDAA,but please this is not for our students just for their teachers to read their emotions and invading their privacy ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+97c8dfc8a7d6,4AEA13D034F3,The expressions would be a good tool to use in classrooms ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ff86124f7bb9,4AEA13D034F3,"There are a lot of things that can back this up. In the text is say "" that you can tell how other people are feeling when they are trying to hide their emotions. The software can recognize, it was created by Dr. Huang. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d0c372aa9210,4AEA13D034F3,The software can tel when people are having different emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0634066e53cd,4AEA13D034F3,"A good thing about the tool is that a, teacher would be able to tell when a student is having a bad day or when you are having mixed emotions. An nother good thing about the software is that teachers would be a ble to tell when students are getting bored in class or are lost in class. The software gives off a prectage of your body by telling if you are happy, nice, mean, fearful, and being disgusted with people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a3c809aed7c,4AEA13D034F3,If I was a teacher in high school i would use this tool. There are so many ways that I would be able to help students in calss. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71aec6c61844,4AEA13D034F3,If a student was having a bad day I would be able to know becasue of the software tool. I would be able to know if a student was struggling in class or that if a student was becoming bored in class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+689bfd7de5cf,4B048F74F3E7,You should join the Seagoing Cowboy and UNRRA program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d90471712efd,4B048F74F3E7,you get to see many unique places. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40b22a7c9215,4B048F74F3E7,you get to help people by getting them food and helping them stay alive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7351dd88d80c,4B048F74F3E7,you get to help hungry soldiers thatare helping our country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dbffe11e3650,4B048F74F3E7,"In the passage Luke wanted to join the program not just to help people but to see all the amazing places in the story Luke said his favorite place was Greece. You could also see some amazing animals along the way.
+
+Luke liked Greece and the other places so much is in Greece he liked Acropolis. He liked the other places but Greece was his favorite. He also went on nine trips! The most of any Seagoing Cowboys. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb1fc00aa58c,4B048F74F3E7,He also had to clean the stalls of the lower levels of the ship sometimes. One day he had to stop working for a couple of days because of cracked ribs because of flying overboard. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d3c2cc253b2c,4B048F74F3E7,The best part of being a Seagoing Cowboy is having fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9757eeb7bf9e,4B048F74F3E7,"The cowboys played baseball,volleyball,and table-tennis and alot of other things too but Luke really loved being a Seagoing Cowboy.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90bc3a6a96f3,4B358CFBD575,Venus is an interesting planet for various reasons. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3e7aa2f88ac7,4B358CFBD575,Scientists believe that Venus is alike to earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+04ec051e51d6,4B358CFBD575,"It has about the same density and size compared to earth. In the article it states in paragraph 4 that ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life, just like Earth."" This quote helps state that it is a interesting planet and alike Earth they want to study and learn about it knowing the conditons. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82672b40f7c4,4B358CFBD575,Another example of how Venus is an interesting planet is because of the atmosphere and the ground conditions it has. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4622a3b41cc,4B358CFBD575,"Astronomers believe humans could survive there, however it wouldn't be easy with the conditions it has. A beam of light can barely pass throught the atmosphere; this causes the standard cameras to be ineffective. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bb898a5e6de,4B358CFBD575,"In conclusion, Venus is a very interesting planet and despite the dangers it has, it is worth it to study. It will be harder to study knowing that you can't take anything from the planet back, or the fact that in order to do anything you need to actually be there on the planet to get a better understanding. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+27a536dea6e8,4BD30FA12457,"Some believe that it should be teacher designed, but others say it should be student designed to benefit them and make the summer project less difficult for the students. Their are many more other opinion since most parents believes that students should not have a summer project since it will stress and pressure them too much over brake. Another reason is to allow the students to take a brake since summer brake is meant fro the students to relax. Some students need to go out of state for family or other reason to enjoy the time they have before starting the learning process again the following year and this will allow students to think of what they will do different in school compared to last year. If the school does decide to remove summer project it will also help the teachers out so they have less work and more time to prepare for next year enrolling students. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+79bf518ba030,4BD30FA12457,Their are many benefits to having the summer project and it being teacher designed since most students do almost all school work teacher designed so the students have some experience. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8dfa779f2ec0,4BD30FA12457,Students also have more time to complete the summer project since they don't have classes or work during their brake. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8f8d45b2acab,4BD30FA12457,"The students environment will be great for the students with the hot weather, great light, and more day time. They could also communicate with one another to talk about the summer project since they are not in a school zone so they are not restricted from using any cellular devices. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a6c7275b419,4BD30FA12457,With the summer project being teacher designed the students could email the teacher if they are having a difficult task finishing the project so the teachers feedback will be a great help to any struggling students that need some assistance. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6ab77d704d3,4BD30FA12457,Some students do benefit from the summer project but others don't even have the time to even complete the project at all. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+04adee0c32c2,4BD30FA12457,Certain students need to go out of the country to see family. Others start to get a summer job to save up money or for some other personal reason. They could get to lazy since they don't have any classes in the summer than they push it to the side or they do it the last week it is due. Students could also forget about the project over the brake. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b77c4e647c7,4BD30FA12457,Summer project could be a great way for students academically but is it gonna benefit them in the long run as they choose their own path. A majority of schools in the U.S don't even have summer projects for students to do over brake. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fd858600deff,4BD30FA12457,Most colleges don't even look or seem interested if you done summer projects your entire school year. Even if the project is either teacher or student designed it won't really help the students after school. Future courses may not even need you do have a summer project done as a requirement to enroll into any courses. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+407b4f7ff7e5,4BD30FA12457,In conclusion the summer project should be teacher designed for the students to make it easier to complete. Having it teacher based makes it more familiar to the students and more understanding. The summer project should be something optional not a requirement for any school. If the summer project was student based than some students may not try up to their own potential. Teachers are less stress over the summer with less work with the summer project and they can focus on future enrolling students.         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+97e2b6366167,4BDD636AAE13,Drivers should not be allowed to use cell phones while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d30312812702,4BDD636AAE13,"Drivers should not be able to use their cellphones while driving, for the reason that the use of a cell phone while operating a motor vehicle is exceedingly hazardous for the driver, as well as others who are traveling along the same road. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6478ae118a25,4BDD636AAE13,"The use of mobile devices while on the road leads to distracted driving which means that the driver is less likely to notice road and safety signals, Pedestrians and the signals coming from other vehicles. Failure to heed these signals has led to injuries and death that could have been prevented had the driver not been using a mobile device while on the wheel. In the U.S., there are laws banning the use of mobile devices or the act of texting while someone is on the wheel.
+
+The National Safety Council reports that cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year. Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. 1 out of every 4 car accidents in the U.S. is caused by texting and driving (""Texting and Driving Accident Statistics""). Cell phone distraction rates are alarmingly high and can pose serious safety risks. You can be charged with murder for texting and driving. Texting is the most alarming distraction sending or reading a text takes your eyes off the road for a couple of seconds. Using a cellphone while driving creates enormous potential for deaths and injuries on
+
+U.S. roads. In 2017 alone 3,166 people were killed in motor vehicle crashes including distracted drivers. Texting and driving is against the law (""The Dangers of Distracted Driving""). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d204c49958af,4BDD636AAE13,"In an effort to fight these problems, more than 30 states now have a law when it comes to texting and driving(""The Risks of Texting While Driving""). ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bbcf4737f9c2,4BDD636AAE13,"The penalties for texting while driving could include hefty fines, license suspension, a rise in auto insurance rates, and prison time. The consequences you'll face for texting and driving are similar to those you'd get for another of the most serious driving offenses. (DUI) sometimes drivers who keep on texting do not see any people or animals crossing the street so there is a tendency to hit somebody crossing the road. Texting while driving is bad because it can bring fatal damages towards life. It may ruin the lives of others or worse might cause your life to end. Texting is a huge distraction to all drivers. Numerous drivers do not take this life threatening habit seriously and try to argue that these are an exception to these rules. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7a5e67151297,4BDD636AAE13,"Texting may be useful, but the use of it can also be very bad. You can not keep both hands on the wheel so accidents may occur. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e493b33b6e2,4BDD636AAE13,"It may put you at greater risk because you fail to see important road signs and signals. Sometimes a stressful text can provoke anger, which might affect your driving behavior. Texting while driving is a horrible idea because you need to look at the phone as you type and read incoming text messages. The vehicle might run over hole or wrong rails which might lead to car accidents. Texting while driving is dangerous and does kill, and has many times. Using a cell phone particularly texting while driving requires the driver to turn his mental attention to the device manipulate it with his hand to look at it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f28d193aa016,4BDD636AAE13,"Texting and driving should be banned because it is a hazard, and is an alert that needs to be reduced. The first reason for texting or using a cell phone while driving is very hazardous to yourself and the people surrounding you. Texting and driving is the act of composing, sending, reading text messages, emails or making similar use of the web on a mobile device while operating a motor vehicle. Texting while driving is considered extremely dangerous by many people, including authorities and in some places have either been outlawed or restricted. No one should text and drive. Be an example for others and if you need to text or talk on the phone, pull over to a safe place. Set rules for yourself and your household regarding texting and driving, lead by example. Currently there is no national ban on texting or using a wireless phone while driving, but a number of states passed laws banning texting or wireless phones requiring hands-free use of wireless phones while driving. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4682283e78c2,4C0EB60473E1,"The Facial Action system ,Detects exactly how other peple are feeling this system has promising applications for a variety of industries. This urguing people that if it is a good idea to put this system to use in classrooms. This systems can extract even the most minimal detal on a paintings. Such as the Mona Lisa from Leonardo da Vinci. And real live people to. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f545f77f4dcb,4C0EB60473E1,I think that it is a good support the use of this technology to read students emotional expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c37fed7a010,4C0EB60473E1,But at the same time they should ask their students before going further. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da3f840221ef,4C0EB60473E1,If is okay with them and their privacy because this machine or systems can read or noticed the most little detail in ur face expresions. Or if they are minors they will have to ask their parents or guardians. The founders or workers of this system or company. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cd403826cb7,4C0EB60473E1,it can also benefit the students to learn more about them self and what they need to succed in life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db0eef4a11d0,4C0EB60473E1,It can also give the researches of this systems new information based on he research gather. From students partipating in the facial system. As the text states that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Using the machine. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+460a244425ca,4C0EB60473E1,By showing they could also see if the students are happy or isgusting with their clases or even their. By saying all of this i think it is a good i dea for this facial device to be use in classrooms. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f1170d8cf824,4C1F76298E24,"Many people believe that "" the Face"" on Mars is actually a alien of some sort or a human. I can truly convince you why it's not a alien, it's only a landform. I can see why people can believe its an actual face because it has the qualities of a face: eyes, mouth, and nose. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fc247dcb4d97,4C1F76298E24,Here are my reasons why this is definetly a landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a7f164026010,4C1F76298E24,"First, there is no evidence of anyone going to Mars. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0845a8409483,4C1F76298E24,""" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea0933a517b9,4C1F76298E24,"Mars has a very harsh climate and no one would even dare go off to a terrible, deserted planet to just not come back. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad2ad5e880fa,4C1F76298E24,"Secondly, there is no history of anything in space involving aliens and their artifacts. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d1bfe2ca0cd,4C1F76298E24,Many would say that the aliens didn't want us to knw they exist ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+46d357df32b4,4C1F76298E24,but the article states it could have been a person going to Mars. Scientists would have contacted the world and said we have evidence or living organisms on Mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4eb099ffdd6,4C1F76298E24,Yet many people would believe living organisms on Mars and I can agree with that if they have fantastic reasoning to their theory. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dbe072eee108,4C1F76298E24,They might say that if someone went to Mars they coud have not brought back anything or they got stranded on Mars and that could have been their body. People may believe that anyone on Mars would not survive the deserted planet with harsh climate and they would surely die there. Some sort of creature may have made it and they would give us evidencce of life on Mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4715971d56ba,4C1F76298E24,You never really know if there may be some sort of living organim on Mars unless you study it closer. Either I may be correct and it just being a landscape made from a storm or I could be wrong and its a living organism. We will never know unless we do the research.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+022d8a40c1ab,4C2AC8A4704A,"I will be telling you about a story called ""A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves."" I think it is a good story. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d65c484be259,4C2AC8A4704A,"In the story it tells about a boy who signs up with his friend to be in a cattle boat job in the passage it said "" The UNRRA hired ""Seagoing Cowboys to take care of cows,horses,mules,and more over seas. Luke and Don signed up for the job."" Luke got to go all around the earth and deliver cattle. Lukes job on the boat was to check the cattle every hour. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e02cad8db71a,4C2AC8A4704A,Luke got to go all around the world and see amazing places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db1c7a3afdaa,4C2AC8A4704A,"Luke had allot of fun and Luke got to see allot of things in other countrys. I think it was a good story. At the end of the story Luke says ""I'm grateful for the opprotunity. It mad me aware of people in other countrys. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a88b4ccfd03e,4C2AC8A4704A,I hope that you saw Lukes point of view and it convinced you to be in the Seagoing Coyboy in the program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b21486d46df4,4C30EEDA3A8F,There shouldn't be a discussion when it comes to texting and driving for obvious reasons. It's just as dangerous as driving under the influence. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bd6ad6811ac5,4C30EEDA3A8F,And there are plenty of ways to send a message using hands free technology. It also being illegal should really mean that you shouldn't be doing it. And you can also kill someone just to send a text message. But it is common in the United States. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26e899e0e0e6,4C30EEDA3A8F,Texting and driving has been banned in most of the United States there are only 2 states that haven't banned texting and driving. And of you get caught by a cop you will be fined up to $400. And that is a lot of money for just sending a text. And may also cause your license to get suspended ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+119c85b3387e,4C30EEDA3A8F,It makes sense because when you text and drive you are twenty three percent more likely to get into a car crash. That makes just as dangerous as driving under the influence. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+04e2541c98c4,4C30EEDA3A8F,A lot of people don't actually know how dangerous and common texting and driving really is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+841eb8b89c71,4C30EEDA3A8F,It makes up eighteen percent of fatal car crashes. And more than 35 percent of teens and adults admit to texting and driving. So even though people know what could happen they still do it either way. And more then ninety percent of people know how dangerous texting and driving is. People take there eyes off the road for four seconds on average which is long enough for you to swerve on to another lane. And at least 9 people are killed every day by distracted drivers. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e9b6c1c913cd,4C30EEDA3A8F,There are plenty of easy ways to prevent texting and driving. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+62661cae65f5,4C30EEDA3A8F,"One way is to have your phone out of reach and on silent so if you get a message or a call you won't be able to get tempted to reach for your phone. Another way is to use an app to block incoming texts or calls. Some apps can send an auto response back, letting the sender know that you are driving and will respond when you are not driving. And one way is to be committed to not texting and driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b53fcad60f03,4C30EEDA3A8F,In conclusion texting and driving and driving distracted is a big problem that can easily be avoided. But people still tend to do it anyways. People should pay a fine if caught by a police officer. And should get there license suspended if they do it a lot. People should be more aware about the consciences that can be caused by this petty action. To keep it simple would you drive 1 ton of pure machinery at 60 miles per hour blindfolded.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd15c3f2529d,4C3F7CDF30EB,There are many advantages of limiting car usage . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+77d518df6eae,4C3F7CDF30EB,"There are 3 important sources that tell us why people should limit car usage . Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00c0f79b8487,4C3F7CDF30EB,"To begin with , In sources 1 & 2 you can tie in the two sources to conclude that limiting car usage is going on in Germany and Paris. Most people walk , ride bikes, or catch the train. Car ownership is allowed but there are only 2 places to put them in large garages at the edge of the development , where a car - owner buys a space for 40,000 along with a home ( 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars para 2 ). Paris decided to ban driving to clear the air of global cities. ( Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog para 10 ). Diesel was blamed , since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline .
+
+As well in sources 3 & 4 Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota and cars have come to an end with culture. They feel as though when people ride bikes , and trains it can prevent car jams. ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 20 ).The goal was to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. In ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 35 ). shows that for example van services can share services to have less cars and less gasoline . They also have a bike sharing company that you can share bikes and dont even need to use a vehicle. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d58c8bcaa438,4C3F7CDF30EB,"There are advantages in limiting the use of cars. With 3 helpful Sources
+
+Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture prove the advanges of limiting cars.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c11733820fca,4C51280DE2A8,"First of all, NASA only gets their information from research and cameras which they depend on to help them with their research too. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+927af62d043a,4C51280DE2A8,"According to the text it states,""New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa."" Well, the Face of Mars does indeed exist but there is not any proof that there was life on Mars once because it seems impossible. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e101902bf1ee,4C51280DE2A8,"To add to that it has been twenty five years since the discovery, and there is not a for sure explanation that is logical because some people think there is smething behind it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb394ddc5bb1,4C51280DE2A8,"Second, now to the conspiracy theorists, they think there was life on Mars like aliens. Anything is possible for one so they can't be entirely incorrect because even a few scientists got to thinking about the Face of Mars could be an alien too. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8798fdaec8b0,4C51280DE2A8,"According to the text it says,""Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor(MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended."" Even scientists believed it too and NASA has logical thinkers in their coorporation too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf84ed2ade47,4C51280DE2A8,"Next, on April 8,2001 they got a picture of the Face,""Malin's team captured an extraordinary using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."" So overall the technology for the camera was very equiped. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6a5204384c8a,4C51280DE2A8,"Therefore, the conspiracy theorists may have some thoughts that make NASA ponder about ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+918dcbc39ebd,4C51280DE2A8,"Such as, NASA could be lying to us all and making us to believe that there is no such thing as extra terestrial objects and such. Here are some interesting theories that government should give us answers on, is the world really round, do aliens exist, is NASA lying, is there really a so called space, could aliens be demons, and overall is the government lying and hiding a bunch of theories from us. In fact they may have those answers to our natural questions about life ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5bdaad361085,4C51280DE2A8,"In conclusion, NASA goes by research and proven facts and conspiracy theories have nothing to back them up. There are so many questions about life and Man do not have all the answers. We do not even know of all the organisms that could be living in the ocean. We may never know these questions, but NASA goes by research, cameras, and approximations about these discoveries and us the people just have to believe in what they are telling us.               ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+997c27a58c94,4C587D63904C,I think there pros and more cons in driving and using your Cell phone is unacceptable. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+04bc789cbd73,4C587D63904C,But I'm in the side of not using your phone while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3886366c7d37,4C587D63904C,Because you're supposed to keep all your attention in driving and in the road all times. Texting and driving can kill in split seconds-just the amount of time it takes to send a quick text message. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72508de86cae,4C587D63904C,"Cell phones cause many distractions, there are numerous amounts of risks while texting behind the wheel and it slows down your reaction time. Therefore its very dangerous using your phone and operating a vehicle be at the same time. Because anything can happen in any moment you can get in a harsh accident just by texting someone or just picking up or phone in general. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9297ba397f3,4C587D63904C,"Cognitive distractors are anything that takes your mind off the road like engaging in a conversation via text or talking on the phone, or trying to operate your navigating system while route. And lastly, manual distractions which are any distractors causing you to take your hands off the wheel such as reaching for your phone to send that quick text. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+452b9a69fc3e,4C587D63904C,If you are texting and driving it's not a good idea unless if it's something extremely important for an example like important call very important and you need to know what it is or an important text that is necessary to know. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eebe8df4784d,4C587D63904C,Simply because someone feels like they must respond to a text immediately is why many of the accidents occur and most of the time this lead to a vehicular accident that can result in death. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3cb42c152d34,4C587D63904C,Teens to the ages 16 and 18 are using their phones and driving they are getting find by the police. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf5bcbbf7b69,4C587D63904C,The find cost about $500 to $800 just because they were texting and driving. Many people think they're not a problem with texting and driving I feel everyone has the responsibility to put the phone down and keep your eyes on the road and drive safely.             ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d43dfbf0f031,4CBB994F69F3,It is much more enjoyable to have the freedom to explore individually. This freedom allows individuals to reach their full potential. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+09e5e9bd1f00,4CBB994F69F3,"Schools that assign summer projects should give students the privilege to explore their interests, while encouraging creativity. Furthermore, schools that assign summer projects should allow students to design their own project because all students are under different circumstances and students should be allowed to be creative, especially in environments outside of school. ",Position,Effective,,,
+de5d9431ce61,4CBB994F69F3,"It is inevitable for students to have different interests, hobbies, and circumstances. For example, some students may enjoy staying in the comfort of their home while others may enjoy the adventures of the outdoors. All students partake in different activities during the summer; it could include a summer job, sports team, or vacations. All of these factors influence a student's life, and this sets one student apart from another ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d28f83688f5,4CBB994F69F3,"Each student should be able to incorporate the experiences of their summer break into their project, eliminating the regulatory aspect of a teacher-designed project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e6ebd5889fc4,4CBB994F69F3,"For some students, regulation and routine can be exhausting. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1969a87f77f9,4CBB994F69F3,"The whole school year is an on-going cycle of the same routine, with little variations. Summer break should quite literally be a break from that, allowing students to stray away from the same routine. For this reason, schools should encourage creativity and free-will through summer projects. Furthermore, allowing students to design their own project gives them a sense of control which might encourage students to actually complete the project. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97f0c0d1bb98,4CBB994F69F3,Some may argue that student-designed projects are a bad idea because students need discipline and the possibility that the goal of continuous learning would not be achieved is greater. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4e4d34049651,4CBB994F69F3,This argument is false because discipline is not always effective ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+78f1fb2a6c91,4CBB994F69F3,Guiding students down the right path while encouraging their own ideas is a more effective approach to helping students learn. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c8cf626c1198,4CBB994F69F3,"Even though a clear outline of directions are given to the student, if a student finds no enjoyment in the process, then it is less likely the project will even be completed. The goal is not to control the student, but to aid the process of learning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bac2cb13b174,4CBB994F69F3,"Simply giving students the freedom to design their own projects allows then to take advantage of their different circumstances and opportunities while implementing creativity. Assigning summer projects to assure students continue learning is an excellent idea, but allowing students to design their own projects may be more effective because all students are different. Anyone can complete a project with step-by-step instructions, but what matters is what is learned through the process. One set of explicit directions cannot satisfy every single students' needs and/or wants in a learning environment. In conclusion, the process of completing the project is more important than just getting it done. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b3c3c02ad399,4D05FF3E63BE,"In the article it talked about trying to travel on Venus. I would say to my best opinion one day we will have the technology to travel to Venus and stay their for my then a couple weeks and be able to learn more about Earth's sister planet. What i like a lot about this article it that it makes sure to talk about a lot of similarities it has to earth and as well as s lot of differences it has to earth as well. What I found the most crazy about this was that no robot or anything we sent to
+
+Venus could survive the harsh conditions for more then a few hours. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b53b7164b47e,4D05FF3E63BE,When it comes down to it the aurthor as you can tell heavily supports the thought of traveling to Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+06e7f120f481,4D05FF3E63BE,"I support It also because it never hurts to learn new things about someone or something, but I think the thing that is stopping us is the cost that it takes to send something up there and there is no point to just send someone up there to die. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f9695b00417,4D05FF3E63BE,What i like about this article is that it talks about a lot of things Venus has in common with earth and a lot of thing Earth and Venus have thats different then each other. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+821e838a36b2,4D05FF3E63BE,Somethings Earth and Venus have in common together is they are both reletivily the same and they are really close to each other in distance. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e854858148c,4D05FF3E63BE,"But some differences are is Earth is ble top have life on it and Venus is not because the heat, pressure, and the chemicals in the air. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a39edaa32e11,4D05FF3E63BE,"Dispite the want to travel to Venus and figure it out it seems highly unklikely because how dangerous the planet actually is. While traveling to Venus sounds like a really cool to do sometime down the future right now and I know we don't have the money to support a trip that far away even if its supposed to be close by. One of the main reasons I think scientists want to travel to Venus so bad is because they're always trying to learn new things and you can't punish anyone for wanting to expand there knowledge. In the end traveling there right now seems impossible because of the air, pressure and heat would kill any human very shortly afore setting foot of the planet, but i do beleive that one day we will diffinetly be there one day in the future. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+11a70c9a4762,4D4548484E40,"Summer is a great time for self education. Student designed summer education is helpful because students are aware of their low points, should be a variable in their success, and should be working comfortably during the summer. Teachers may know a lot about their students, but no one understands the students like themselves. If a student is struggling on something, they can work on it as a project over the summer. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+50c11a3db5dd,4D4548484E40,"As the student, it's your job to complete a task, and you should have no complaints over a project designed yourself. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5c5356e98f7d,4D4548484E40,"During the summer, students would need time to de-stress over school. Therefore, students should be able to construct projects that are comfortable for them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62be04941a1e,4D4548484E40,"Some may say that all school projects should be designed by the teacher, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+724c4e609f54,4D4548484E40,"they are not the students. Occurring over the summer, school projects should be designed by the student because of the students knowledge of their struggles, they are their own success, and it should be a comfortable leaning opportunity. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cd409e99cf4e,4D4548484E40,"Being aware of your own flaws if something nearly everyone is great at, and working to better yourself is the next step in that process. When I was younger, everyone would assume that I was just a kid and didn't understand that I was doing wrong. Although I may not have taken action upon it, I knew that not doing work or submitting to peer pressure was bad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6a0a32370ed,4D4548484E40,Student's understand their faults and they know what they need to work on to fix them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d03652a06651,4D4548484E40,"Knowing your faults is one thing, but acting upon them is important. Many students, when given a choice in their work, will choose not to work hard or procrastinate upon them. I can attest to this myself, as I set many self projects for myself that I do not complete. Students who are hard working and care about their grade will complete their goals. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b744924acdc,4D4548484E40,"Self made projects put the student in charge of their work and help them understand that they must complete it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e41ca65664a2,4D4548484E40,"Summer is a break time off of school, therefore, students should not have to be given work that could be stressing or uncomfortable. Tens of thousands of students drop out of education due to stress and is part of the reason why there is such a large time interval between the beginning and end of the school year. Any extra work after school has ended should be kept to a comfortable, non-stressful amount of work ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d6f04dc3cf9,4D4548484E40,"The summer is a long break between school and students should have a say in any work that is assigned to them during it; this is because students are aware of what they need to improve on, should be in charge of their work and whether they complete it or not, and should be able to make their work comfortable.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+186af012d630,4D4B09BC09A5,"Just think about, you in a new place. Some where you have never been before. Just emagine how awesome that would be. What if you were visiting new places while helping those in need. It will truly save a life. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+80490346f154,4D4B09BC09A5,"This is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboy program. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+423656cfa3d4,4D4B09BC09A5,Seagoing Cowboy program is amazing. Don't you want to be inspired to do good ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e42bf4032940,4D4B09BC09A5,Honestly helping someone would feel great. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e04db0c1ab04,4D4B09BC09A5,This program is also a great way to get in touch with nature on the sea. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ff65b1e04ec,4D4B09BC09A5,"Plus the cattle that is on the boat and there is more from where that came from. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f5ff3c2ebe7,4D4B09BC09A5,Helping someone is a great job to have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+979f3ddeca2e,4D4B09BC09A5,Even the places you go will be a great learning experience. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dba4d7a91fde,4D4B09BC09A5,Learning different cultures and lauguges is a great way to get closer into loving this job. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab275bb0e913,4D4B09BC09A5,It is truly a life changing experience and this is something you really dont want to pass up. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d44cadf88aea,4DB034BFB641,I belive that using the Facial Action Coding System can value to students in many ways. in the classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5aa6bcf75433,4DB034BFB641,"It seems that it can beused to look at the muscles of the human face. they can be used to represent emotions such as fear,sadness hapyness,disgust and even anger. to me it all make sense becuase back then schools didnt use many laptopsao back then it wouldve been useless. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+06b067d3d255,4DB034BFB641,In the article it explianshow using this in school it can show if people are stressed and bored as well as tired. it can be used to base ur lessons depnding on ur mood as it is being scanned ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa9dd9e08875,4DB034BFB641,"students can use this to help study or get help on things in school that they dont understand. it could as well improve on grades wwhen testing comes around. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a4cde13190c,4DB034BFB641,this famous new kind of technology has been used on a old painting the mona lisa. she is a famous painting that has a grand total of 83%happyfe 9%disguted. and 2% angry in lifethis technology csn be useful yo us ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a47c44a8ea9,4DB817B0DE25,"As time progresses, so do classroom education and the technological innovations applied to it. While teachers search for helpful methods to engage their pupils in education, the world of science develops more and more inventions, such as the Facial Action Coding System, to improve standards of living ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e648dabf94a2,4DB817B0DE25,"Despite its putative effectiveness in other fields such as advertisement or marketing, Facial Action Coding System technology possesses no place of value in a classroom and would serve as a hinderence to a student's learning process. ",Position,Effective,,,
+e76232238976,4DB817B0DE25,"Although this software may serve as an effective source of profit for online corporations, it has no valueable place in classrooms. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4b44b58c93cb,4DB817B0DE25,"In the sixth paragraph of the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author illuminates the possibilites of success human-emotion-recognizing computer software provides in terms the world of marketing, describing how analyzing the emotional response to a Web ad popping up on one's computer screen can mold the variety of its future ads to a more preferred selection (6). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cfc05c2853fa,4DB817B0DE25,"While this software may be helpfully applicable to marketing schemes, its analyzation of human emotions would only deter from a student's learning in the classroom due to its possible misinterpretations and miscalculations ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0cfc782bc2d,4DB817B0DE25,"Verbal human communication is relied upon to determine what about a lesson plan confuses a student, and although a computer might register a student's confused expression and recognize that the lesson pace might be too fast for this individual scholar, the computer would be unable to pinpoint what exactly the student fails to understand. Other events may be weighing down heavily on a student's mind, causing their face to contort and convey the emotions brought on from factors outside of the learning setting. A change in emotion not caused by a difficult lesson plan would cause the software to possibly alter the lesson pace when the student did not require any adjustment and ultimately generate frustration in the already distressed student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+58c7f67ea50d,4DB817B0DE25,"Although each day, more and more opportunities to develop and improve technology and learning are created, sometimes these brilliant innovations do not mesh well with education. Despite the proposed effectiveness this software can serve for marketing companies, Facial Action Coding System would only produce obstacles to a student's learning process, ultimately diminishing any value it could potentially possess in a classroom. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+227c92280d31,4DF55925F544,Why should we limit our uses on car usages ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+95203c6a37b7,4DF55925F544,some people se the limiting of car usage as less tense ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a75f374f279c,4DF55925F544,""" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"" said heidrun Walter, a mother of two. when you have a car you'll have to find space for it as well as a house to buy. There are only two places to park at the edge of a development, where a car-owner has to pay $40,000, along with a home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea339be9c000,4DF55925F544,"passenger cars are responcible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in the United states. with less cars people have the advantages of being a walk away from a store instead of a highway ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72468bcad65f,4DF55925F544,With less cars that give off gas emissions the less our ozone will deplete. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fe5f17301c6,4DF55925F544,"Lucky for us Americas love affair twords vehicles seem to be coling down. When the number of child growth grew, the number of miles driven dropped steadly down in 2005. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f738b5e08032,4DF55925F544,With cars the rodes are more dangerous anything could happen to anyone or anything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3405a2dbd9b7,4DF55925F544,In doing all of these thing this could help stop the greenhouse effect on our planet and start saving it insted of killing it.                                 ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef4adf74ea51,4E078101C9DD,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning. Should these projects be teacher-designed or student-designed? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b16a0b523898,4E078101C9DD,I believe these summer projects should be student-designed and not teachers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+01edcd2da344,4E078101C9DD,How would the students enjoy their summer and knowing that they got projects that is due before school starts again ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0597f561f752,4E078101C9DD,If we call it summer break then the students shouldn't get any summer projects thats gonna ruin the break for them. Let them enjoy their summer break ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+145c77b8cf1b,4E078101C9DD,I understand where they teachers are coming from and trying to assign the students these summer projects and making sure they are ready for their upcoming classes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+db921223a14d,4E078101C9DD,I do understand why teachers believe that summer projects would help students continue learning. Summer projects does help students stay on task and busy and prepare them for their upcoming classes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b0b3e530f759,4E078101C9DD,Summer projects are beneficial but students don't understand that. The students been in school for so long that at this point they just want summer break to come. Summer is time where the students can relax their minds and be stress free for little. You also gotta understand that some students don't have the time for it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c00f27ee7f4b,4E078101C9DD,"there are students that play summer sports, there are students that work in summer to provide money for them self or help their families out. How would they do that knowing they got summer projects due and stress about not having enough time to do it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+488737735477,4E078101C9DD,I believe that summer projects should be student-designed and not teachers. It should depend on what the student want for himself not what the teacher wants. If the students wants to to stay on task and continue their learning in summer break then they can sign up for online classes or ask for summer projects to do. Not all students have the time to do summer projects. Students won't have any free time to enjoy their summer or family vacation. Let the students enjoy their summer break without a stress and relax their minds.            ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c7ace9447743,4E1A49DAA439,"It is necessary for a student to keep their mind active over long breaks from school, such as summer break.
+
+Some may say that assigning a teacher designed project is the way to go ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b7f9f84ec1d4,4E1A49DAA439,a student designed project would be vastly more effective. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+179c169cd32b,4E1A49DAA439,A project designed by the students would guide them to putting more effort into it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08cb4166d080,4E1A49DAA439,it would help teach some independence ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e960eb60528,4E1A49DAA439,would be less of a chore to the students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0ceb929c9ff,4E1A49DAA439,"Because the projects are student designed, the students will feel a greater sense of responsibility for it, and will put more effort into it, which will up the quality of the projects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+746153315af3,4E1A49DAA439,"When a student feels responsible for a project, they will go to greater lengths to ensure that they do it right, and that it turns out good.
+
+No one wants something that is entirely their own to turn out bad.
+
+The students will have greater creative liberty with how they execute it.
+
+This flexibility will accomodate every student, no matter how they learn best.
+
+Wether it be writing a paper, painting a picture, creating a diagram, or making a website, the students would be able to learn in whatever way they do best, no matter what that way may be.
+
+Students will be better at ensuring that all details of the project are included.
+
+If they are the ones to decide what the project includes, there is no way they can fall short of the information required.
+
+Making it a student led project will allow the students to take a significant amount of pride in it, that does not come with other projects.
+
+Having the students design their own projects would allow the students to try new styles of projects.
+
+Perhaps the teachers they have do not assign a specific type of project that a student really enjoys.
+
+The students would be able to do that type of project.
+
+The students could also have the desire to try a new style of project.
+
+The projects that are assigned at school can often be redundant or generally overdone.
+
+Having the students design their own project will allow the students to try something new and possible adopt a preferred way of completing projects.
+
+Having the students do the projects that they want to so will also help communicate to the teachers what the students want.
+
+When a teacher sees a new and unique way of leaning, they could potentially use it in the future as a new and more captivating way of teaching. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dac045f69936,4E1A49DAA439,This will be a wonderful chance for the students to obtain some independance that is not really offered at school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7141d534a2d,4E1A49DAA439,"Usually when assigned a project, there is a paper that has all of the requirements layed out in a convenient guidline for the students to follow.
+
+Between the guidline and the teachers constant presence, the project loses a majority of its independance.
+
+Having a project that is entirely up to the students will allow the students to learn to be more independant, which will come in handy later on in life. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0300aae6511e,4E1A49DAA439,"Student designed means every aspect.
+
+They would be able to base their project on whatever they want. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2830da1a103,4E1A49DAA439,"This would give them an opportunity to research something that they don't already know anything about.
+
+Often students cannot pursure their interests because of all their other responsibilities.
+
+Many students cannot take the classes that they wish to take becuase they have other classes that they are required to complete in order to graduate.
+
+Becuase there is no determined subject of the project, the students will have the rare chance to research whatever they want to.
+
+This could even be a time where the students could learn something that is not taught in school at all. This also applies to classes that they may be taking that they do not do many projects in.
+
+This would give them the chance to use and display the knowledge that they already have.
+
+Similarly to the style of projects, upon seeing all of the topics that interest the students, the teachers may be inclined to add some of the topics to their curriculum, which would once again encourage the students to be more interested in their classes.
+
+When one student is interested in something, it is more than likely that other students will be the same.
+
+Though it is important for students to work with topics that are already somewhat familiar to them, it's also very important for students to step outside of their comfort zone into something entirely new.
+
+When a student begins learning about a topic with an open mind and a goal to learn, they may find more than a project, they may find a passion.
+
+It's very important to allow students to explore new interests while still in highschool.
+
+Being in the smae routine for years may put a student into the mindset that they should not change what they are already doing, or it could even discourage students from pursuing new interests.
+
+It is important that students find these interests so that they will have an idea of what they want to do when they go to college, or when they step out into the world as adults. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97d448b5a386,4E1A49DAA439,"Students should be able to design their own projects, rather than teachers.
+
+Student designed projects will push them to put more effort into in, to achieve some independence, and to generally care more about what they are learning.
+
+Especially now days, the curriculum in more so about teaching what will be on the standardized tests that we must pass in order to graduate, rather that the interests that the students actually have.
+
+The mindset that we must prepare students by not allowing them to pursue their own interests needs to stop.
+
+We should strive to make learning more fun and cater the the interests of the students.
+
+When students know what they enjoy, they will be more prepared for the future in which they will not be stuck doing a job that they do not enjoy, to live a life that has little interest to them.
+
+One of the biggest issues right now with highschoolers is that they have no idea what they want to do with their future. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+752ea664fa1b,4E1C636ABEAD,"People should not be able to use cell phones while operating a vehicle.
+
+There are several reasons why and I will be discussing two of them. Cell phones are a convience to our society, but there should be a time and place for them to be used. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+75eadf5fe286,4E1C636ABEAD,"First, cell phones are a benefit and allows everyone to have access to a telephone at all times of the day. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24f1fdc84a06,4E1C636ABEAD,"Kids, teenagers, adults, even grandparents have cell phones.
+
+As you pay attention to people that you pass by whether it's in traffic or walking, there is a cell phone in toat.
+
+While riding a bike, people are on the phone.
+
+While driving cars, people are on the phone.
+
+While sitting waiting for a bus, people are on the phone.
+
+Even while people are walking they are on the phone.
+
+Do they get any break?
+
+The phone that is?
+
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+281a3cbf052d,4E1C636ABEAD,"With all of this phone use where is the focus of the individual?
+
+Individual focus does not exist when everyone is on their cell phone. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fafd9d04cc0,4E1C636ABEAD,"Whether they are looking at the weather, SnapChat, Facebook, or Instagram, they are still not focused on their surroundings.
+
+With the lack of focus there have been more accidents and deaths.
+
+Accidents occur when you are distracted and death can easily follow.
+
+While driving the attention needs to be on the road.
+
+There have been documentaries where those that have lost loved ones due to inappropriate cell phone use read the last message that was sent or the last words that they user said.
+
+Many times that call or message wasn't that important and could have waited. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a31f2fa2c140,4E1C636ABEAD,"Overall, individuals should not use cell phones while driving.
+
+They cause distraction and lack of focus.
+
+Many lives could be saved if people weren't careful about their cell phone usage.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0c2abbb9b444,4E1CF079ECDD,Technolgy to read the emotional expressions of students in the class room is not valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+99c3bf2b871f,4E1CF079ECDD,"because in paragraph 2 it says "" how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a331bbb2fdc3,4E1CF079ECDD,Why would we let a computer decide the way we feel when we already know how we feel ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5d1f14ddf97f,4E1CF079ECDD,"The Mona Lisa was made to not show any emotions so why add emotions to the picture . Also in paragraph one its says "" Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to comminicate "" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7416f9b1f9c,4E1CF079ECDD,I feel as if we depend on technology to much and technology is taking over the world . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de5170d8c13d,4E1CF079ECDD,"For example in paragraph 6 it says "" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"" Dr. Huang predicts . ""Then it could modify the lesson , like an effective human instructor ."" That is what the teacher is here for to modify the lesson if the student does not understand the assignment . Why let a computer take over ?  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26670de053e4,4E2B21AF8C1D,Why they invent Facial Action Coding System? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b853950581cd,4E2B21AF8C1D,"Well in my personal opinion this is a good experiment for student, family, etc, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+74d6929d41c4,4E2B21AF8C1D,"because sometimes people do not want show they emotions or feeling, for example: ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b491cbe4f41e,4E2B21AF8C1D,"If a girl of school that has depression or personal problems and she do not want talk abaut that with her teacher or consuler and this girl is thinking in kill herself, if the school have the Facial Action Coding System the professor can save her life, that a great experiment, but one thing is all school can't have it because are expense so this experiment can't help to all students or families that need.
+
+In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto, the Dr. Huang says ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal"" he is trying to said that they experiment is not just for people, he is says that is universal so that mean is for all that have face or that the Facial Action Cording System can read emotions for example:The Facial Action can read the Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a1f311058f1,4E2B21AF8C1D,"In conclusion the
+
+Facial Action Coding System is a veryy good option for school they can saves lifes, and evit masacres of students with that Facial Action and be a major country. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+58f9d175aab7,4E2D058C025D,I think the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) should be used in classrooms because it would help to see the emotions of kids. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ab404ef94c8a,4E2D058C025D,Like see if they need help or if they aren't feeling good. Mostly things like that. You could also use it to see if kids are lying or not when they get in trouble and have to go to the principle or when they get in trouble at home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7.54221362E+097,4E2D058C025D,"Mona Lisa: 83% happy, 9% disgusted , 6% fearful, and 3% angry! When Mona Lisa was painted in 1503 we had no clue how she was really feeling. But with the FACS it is now easy to see how she was feeling. That is a good thing because it could help us in the future with life or death situations. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5bf8eb6966f6,4E2D058C025D,"When we ask questions like ""Can we actually 'calculate' emotions like we calculate math problems? or ""How can a simple computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans have to use and show how we feel? shows that we humans need this type of cool technology in the future to make things easier than what they are nowadays! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b51003231e3,4EBE610AF54A,"Would it be safe to travle to Venus or what about to colect some samples of Venus like rocks,gasses or other things in Venus? Have people wounder how is Venus and is it simliller or different to Earth ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1e35e20a8899,4EBE610AF54A,We know that Venus is a planet and that Venus is closest to Earth but some poeple might not know how danger Venus has. Has any people or a ship landed on Venus or expernece how Venus feels or looks like on ground. Is it is real worth going to Venus and expercence there conditions or find any life forms in Venus? ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+81bd770abe61,4EBE610AF54A,Venus Is a similler planet like Earth but only its density and size of the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1adc874aafaf,4EBE610AF54A,"Venus Is a Extreme planet, the conditions on Venus are bad, in Venus almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The clouds in Venus are different, there clouds of highly corrosive sulfuir acid is in the atmosphere. On Venus the surface temperatuer avage is 800 degrees Fahreanheit acording to the artical. Those are some extreme temperatuers for a human and for a space craft to be stay in Venus. In Venus the pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in Earth, humans or machines can not with stand the heat or pressure of the atmosphere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5b147711f80,4EBE610AF54A,Humands cant live in these types of conditions like Venus has a person can end up dead and a machien or a ship can melt ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf5f7705fc16,4EBE610AF54A,"No even a space ship or human landed on Venus in these types of conditions. Samples have not even been taken like rocks or gases because of these conditions in Venus. These types of misions can be super risky to do becasue of they extreme conditions the planet has. Earth and Venus are different, Earth has less extreme conditions than Venus dose but later on NASA is trying to find ways to see how they can have protection on there spacce ships and people to try to get some samples from Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c819b58e66f,4EBE610AF54A,"This is why and how dangerous Venus can be and how there condtions are extreme. Peopel would not risk dying to get some samples from Venus or try to go to
+
+Venus. This why its not worth to study and analize samples of Venus and later on they can try to find better material or things to help out the space ship and humans to try to land or analize any samples from Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4d30713d25de,4EE35E322F9F,"""Luke also found time to have fun ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+770f83f5d3b4,4EE35E322F9F,the fun they had was baseball and volleyball ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+624c69a66417,4EE35E322F9F,"Luke has a lot of things to do because it says, He was working two part jobs in a grocery store and a bank his friend Don Reist invited him to go ona Europe on a cattle boat. So you can tell they go on alot of adventures all the time because in the text it says, ""It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States annd a month to get to China"". Luke and Don are always prepared to go to places because it says, ""Katie's farm a boy came to Luke to prepare him for the for hrd work not the dangers at sea and his job was to watch the animals every hour ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+931dc96be25f,4EE35E322F9F,Luke got to see new things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1e2f662c4bc,4EE35E322F9F,"""It opened the world to him i'm grateful for the opportunity he says, It made me more aware of people of other countries"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21ee87854b56,4EE35E322F9F,Luke had to watch alot of animals ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1de332a61f01,4EE35E322F9F,"""UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4381b77d1722,4EE35E322F9F,The captain he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside Luke's heart bursted like 300mph. As he vrrrrooommmeeeddd a opening on the side of the ship a long strip of metal stopped his slide from falling into a dark Atlantic. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b954d4f12a1,4EE35E322F9F,"On his ship they have so much fun activities I know this because in the text it says, ""That they have table tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing reading and whittling"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+072835f1a40a,4EE35E322F9F,Luke said that the day in pacific war ended they got there seaman's paper's and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster headed for greece. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+093115cbb20a,4EE35E322F9F,I think you should go to the program I hope you like it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00705e17dfcd,4EEB3CAA6F48,the author supports his ideas very well ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+770eff681da1,4EEB3CAA6F48,"because, he tells why its important to study venus and why it is the worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ea8e47cea64,4EEB3CAA6F48,"The author also says ¨venuse is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size¨.They have aslo sent numerous spacecrafts and have done previouse missions. The pervious missions was unmanned. There has not been a spaceship that has touched venuse and why, the author said that gthe reason that spaceship or has not landed was becuse it would not last mor than just a few hours. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d03c354d05e5,4EEB3CAA6F48,"The author supports the idea that studying venus is worthy pursuit despit the dangers, because know that i read the story icould see why. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8c21d9403538,4EEB3CAA6F48,Venus might be dangers to go to and explore but by making spacecrafts and more andmakeing experiment it probably would not be so dangerous to send spacecraft or maybe a spaceshit to try it out again. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7aa9207b3cbf,4EFC8F589A83,"Knowledge, it is one of the most powerful things in the world. How do people gain knowledge? They gain information from their mentors, teachers, coaches, parents, and older siblings. People are always learning something new everyday, from how to do long division to how to make friends. The school districts are creating projects for students to do over the summer so they can continue to learn while out of school. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+71dcb55bc10a,4EFC8F589A83,some say that teacher-design is better and more effective ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ddd7943255f2,4EFC8F589A83,student-design actually can benefit the students more ,Position,Effective,,,
+bcc40120c0dd,4EFC8F589A83,by opening up their imagination and also expands their creativity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf5ef126585f,4EFC8F589A83,"Summer is mean't for fun and laughter, not being kept inside all day working on a project the teacher assigned over summer break. The whole point of summer is being away from school and having a vacation. So wouldn't students prefer to do a project about something that they are passionate about? Indeed, studies show that when students do school work that they choose and are passionate about their work ends up being more creative and overall better performance. Students are just growing up and in school they aren't allowed to truly express themselves because they are either too shy or the class doesn't discuss their interests. Teenagers only want to do and listen to what they want, they don't want a teacher giving them homework over summer break not even to mention that it is not something they enjoy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ed1184390dde,4EFC8F589A83,students grow up doing what they are told by their parents and teachers. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7ad04f7cf2e,4EFC8F589A83,"students grow up with an endless imagination and one day eventually it dies when they grow up to become adults. That is why a student-design project can end up being more beneficial than supposed to having a teacher assign the students a project where they aren't going to have fun and in the end will probably forget what the project was about. Students learn better when they do something that interests them and benefit more from that then to do a project about the presidents.
+
+Having a teacher-design project has minimal benefits, that is why having a student-design project, which opens up great minds and can help students comprehend better what they are learning when doing something they enjoy. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+49660e140765,4F51DB73DF1E,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author believes that studying and exploring Venus is worth the pursuit despite the dangers it brings. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6bf3b76a030c,4F51DB73DF1E,The author uses facts and information to back this idea up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dac8126fdc34,4F51DB73DF1E,The author has facts on poor conditions on Venus then gives us information and ideas on ways to overcome. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65034518b3b2,4F51DB73DF1E,The author is using a problem and solution method. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90b07fa98701,4F51DB73DF1E,The author supported the idea with facts and more ideas that would make it safer and beneficial to us if we travel to Venus for further examination ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9212664396f3,4F51DB73DF1E,"In the article the author talks about how Venus has really bad conditions, but they are all just challenges that can be overcome ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81d6709d5dbb,4F51DB73DF1E,These challenges are the main thing holding us back from exploring further. The author believes that our travels beyond Earth should'nt be limited by dangers and doubts. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+079e2cc8b14a,4F51DB73DF1E,The article also talkes about how we need longer lasting technology for further research ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2ea14149980,4F51DB73DF1E,"It mentions mechanical computers and how they don't require electronics at all. The author suggests using the mechanical parts, like the ones used in the mechanical computers, and using them to create technology that will last longer on Venus. This would allow for more research. More research means better understanding of Venus which will allow for better technology to with stand the conditions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d23e9c37581d,4F51DB73DF1E,"In the paragraph above the author gives us a problem on how our technology can't survive the conditions, because the systems get fried and break. Then the author gives us a possible solution to our problem. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b432c770500b,4F51DB73DF1E,The author gives us a new idea for better technology. The author uses a problem and solution to support the idea. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ea8c42e10b5,4F51DB73DF1E,"In conclusion, the author supported the idea well by using a problem and then giving a solution using facts and evidence. The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it represents. The author then goes on to show us that these dangers can be overcome and these dangers shouldn't stop us from exploring. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e302fd410ed5,4F627C43D63F,Do you know how landforms are made ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+78f4f58acb1c,4F627C43D63F,The face on Mars is a landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+60d53cbba3f7,4F627C43D63F,"One reason I think the face is a landform, is because the sand on that planet builds up and increases into a mountain. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+41bc4859a054,4F627C43D63F,"There are also astroids that strike the planet, making the planet have different size shapes on its surface. Also, there are tectonic plates to move the land. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ad45eb1763a,4F627C43D63F,"One other reason I think it is a landform is because, if aliens were to create the enourmus structure, how would they do it and why would they do it? To me, there is no other explanation other than it was created by natural landforms ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d7959fb4e35,4F627C43D63F,"Also, whos to say that aliens are real or not? It wouldnt matter because even if people said aliens are real, they would need to have evidence explaining why and how aliens accually exist ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b9b01b16840,4F627C43D63F,"Then and only then, would I consider looking into the matter of aliens creating the structure. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+55d4fc50464b,4FAC3B29417F,"The final bell on the last day of school is a sound that is rejoiced by students and teachers alike. This bell is the signal to the beginning of summer break. While this break is usually filled with vacations, sporting events, and sleeping late, there is another key element that represents summer break for many students: the project. This project is incorporated into the summer break to assure that students continue learning. In many schools, this project is teacher-designed, resulting in uninterested and procrastinating students. In addition, many teacher-designed projects do not foster creativity. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+94cefc8effe4,4FAC3B29417F,These negative results of teacher-designed summer projects can be reversed by allowing student-designed projects. ,Position,Effective,,,
+fc3afa8ba368,4FAC3B29417F,"Student-designed summer projects allow students to choose a topic that they are interested in, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3c850f2249c7,4FAC3B29417F,"be creative, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b76e0750f825,4FAC3B29417F,enjoy learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a221443dcfe7,4FAC3B29417F,"By allowing students to choose a topic that is compelling to them, they will be driven to complete the project with their best effort ",Claim,Effective,,,
+456ff5af2f3d,4FAC3B29417F,Students will also have the option to choose a possible career path and research it throughout the summer. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+75bf7fc15221,4FAC3B29417F,"With their research and project, students can essentially ""test drive"" their intended career, instead of waiting until college to discover that they are completely uninterested in their major. For example, one student may desire to become an elementary school teacher. In her project, she decides to research how to become a teacher and the skills that the profession requires. After completing her research, she creates a binder of lesson plans that correspond with her state's standards of learning for her grade of choice. Consequently, she discovers that she truly has a passion for teaching and is reassured on her career choice through this student-designed summer project. The skills that she learned, including her lesson plans, can be used if/when she decides to become an elementary school teacher. While students are allowed to explore professional realms through student-designed summer projects, the possibilities are endless. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dcba132a691e,4FAC3B29417F,"When students have the option to be creative with their project, this captures the interest of many artistic students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e09b180a90c4,4FAC3B29417F,"Teacher-designed projects are mostly straightforward, and have clear right and wrong answers. As a result, there is minimal room for creativity and originality. However, student-designed projects give students the ability to create an interesting and creative project, that captivates not only their attention, but the teachers that will evaluate it the next school year. For example, a student who is very creative may choose to design a project that showcases ways to use recycled materials in art. This project not only uses their artistic and creative abilities, but it also incorporates scientific and environmental strategies. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ef05f9ce6960,4FAC3B29417F,Student-designed projects allow students to enjoy learning ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5c3ed3e4bc7b,4FAC3B29417F,"Some students who may dislike school, may discover a new found love of learning when they are given the opportunity to create the framework of their project. Students are more likely to enjoy a project on a topic that they have a passion for rather than a topic that is simply assigned to them by a teacher. Responsibility skills are also developed as a result of student-designed projects, since they not only are required to complete the project, but they also must develop the project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf4ea573b068,4FAC3B29417F,"However, some teachers dislike student-designed projects since there is no clearly set standards or grading rubric, which results in a lengthy grading period. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ed3eca8da3a5,4FAC3B29417F,"While this can be true, teachers can create an overall rubric that addresses the key elements that each project must include, no matter the topic. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d151b68ca92a,4FAC3B29417F,"As a result, summer projects should be student-designed. This project style not only results in increased student involvement, but it also allows them to explore subjects that they may not have been able to otherwise. Student-designed projects also assist in the development of higher-level thinking, organizational skills, and responsibility skills; all of which are necessary in the professional world. Students are not only enjoying their topic, but they are also continuing to learn, which is the overall concept of summer projects. With student-designed projects, the possibilities are truly endless. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+76c8247bd095,4FDB610CDF7B,"Cars have become apart of the everyday life of the average person. It's a mode of transportaion that everyone uses in every second of their life; though it is faster then walking itself, cars are not always helpful to us. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2bc81904ddc1,4FDB610CDF7B,by limiting car usage it is possible to relieve stress ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fa2e0c078d0c,4FDB610CDF7B,reduce pollution. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b603a34c54e1,4FDB610CDF7B,Limiting the use of cars can bring less stress to the everyday driver. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b1d08b23a71f,4FDB610CDF7B,"When in a car, it is easy to see when the driver is stressed out. Stress accumulates with traffic jams or when someone is becoming infuriated by another driver, who is driving right in front of the other driver and going really slow. There are people who have seen there stress levels drop when they are not in or don't own a car. For instance, a community in Vauban, Germany, at least 70 percent of their residents don't own a car, while 57 percent sold their car to move there. A woman, Heidrun Walter, who is a resident there stated, ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way""(Source 1). This verifies how people can get away from stress by just not having a car. In Bogota, Colombia, there is a day when automobiles are banned for a day, with the execption of buses and taxis. This day has become very popular, and is a ""good opportunity to take away stress""(Source 3), as said by Carlos Arturo Plaza, a business man who rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife on that day. On this day millions Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work, leaving the streets free of any traffic jam, when a driver gets stressed out he most, as stated in source 3. This shows the number of people who participated in this event and also shows their, less stressful, alternative modes of transportation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22c7393c99d5,4FDB610CDF7B,"Along with relieving stress, pollution will become less of a problem ",Claim,Effective,,,
+40a4fedaf33e,4FDB610CDF7B,"Cars are beneficial when it comes transportation, but they can cause harm to the environment as well. Pollution is a major problem in the today's world, and with the number of cars that are in use everyday it will only become worse. Smog or any other type of pollution can cause a city or even a country to take action. Such a Paris, Fance, who put a ban on driving to reduce pollution in their city, which rivaled Beijing, China, known as the one the most polluted cities in the world, as said in source 2. This strenghens the problems that cars pose on the world, these problems can lead to delivery companies losing money because the ban was put up and won't be lifted until the smog is gone. In addition, more information about car pollution can be found in source 1. There it talks about how cars are the ""linchpin"" of suburbs, and how they're ""a huge impediment to current efforts to drasticallly reduce greenhouse gas emissions."" In some places this is slowly resolving itself; places such as the United States have seen a drop in miles driven per person since it's peak in 2009. Sociologists believe that, ""it will have beneficial implications carbon emissions and the environment""(Source 4). This indicates that, while it is a major issue it is not impossible to solve it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0c1ffeb1bf6d,4FDB610CDF7B,"Cars are an easy and fast form of transportation, but they can also cause harm to people and the environment. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1a14ac8aa073,4FDB610CDF7B,"No matter how beneficial cars are to us, wouldn't it be better to limit the use of them? This way if cars usage is limited, then the less problems we face. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+96821580f77e,4FFA8AA9820C,The new technology that Dr. HUANG is coming up with is a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a6179fe77ad,4FFA8AA9820C,I can detect when people in the classroom are trying to hide therre feeing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e4421ef0430,4FFA8AA9820C,"In the text it states that
+
+At least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions. The software is the latest innovation from prof. THOMAS HUANG, of the beckman institute for advanced science at the university of Illinois, working in collaboration with prof. NICU SEBE of the university of amsterdam. Dr. HUANG and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. The MONA LISA demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it showa just how much this computer can do. Imagne a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f673aa1d4b6a,4FFC4DB08B42,I claim this technology ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e90fdf49292a,4FFC4DB08B42,because when it scans somebody face it can tell us the percentage of out facial expressions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d302ce9e87b1,4FFC4DB08B42,For an example Mona Lisa demonstrates that is really surprising to bring a simlie to your face while the computer shows you based on much percentage of happiness you have right now. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fbd4ea04f4c,4FFC4DB08B42,Another example is that the facial technology had a lot of different movements that can track your facial face movements. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+404477d026e9,4FFC4DB08B42,"Because it all about the muscles in your facial face. They even indicate the difference between a genuine simlie and a force one. You can imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad or angry or even fear. For example, if you simlie when a web ad is on your screen a very similar ad will pop up again. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. Based on how you act. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78b077b2711b,4FFC4DB08B42,Having this new technology would be a better fit with the people because when is feeling down and the other person don't know on how they feel they always use the facial technology to show the percentages of how down they really are. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2d65b62a3a89,4FFC4DB08B42,"But for some people they don't need that because we can tell others people facial expressions by just looking at them clearly, which it true. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+bb9c86613619,4FFC4DB08B42,"We already know that if someone is feeling happy,sad,angry,or fear. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05849e96d70a,500F35F18E1F,A butte and a mesa these are all natural things on our planet Earth. So why do you think that the planet Mars also can't have these things ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d6e750729cf4,500F35F18E1F,Earth is covered in these mesas so more than likely other planets including Mars probably have buttes and mesas ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b48cbc7b749e,500F35F18E1F,its just coincidentall that it looks like a face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5db001ff212c,500F35F18E1F,the mesa isn't an alien artifact and just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+62bb0aba41f4,500F35F18E1F,"If you go out to the Rocky Mountains and look around you can probably see tons of Mesas maybe not as big ,but they are still the same natural landform ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+020731095a5b,500F35F18E1F,"The mesa is big and does look like a face at first glance ,but there is no way you can prove it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c4ff0397aaa,500F35F18E1F,"If you look at the image taken from the spaceship Viking 1 from 1976 you can see that only looks somewhat similar to a face. And then 22 years later a picture from a Mars Global surveyor you can see that it very clearly isn't a face and instead just a natural landform. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93b1fa73b367,500F35F18E1F,The only way that this could be an alien artifact is if the martians are inside of it or underneath it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c3b297bff3bf,500F35F18E1F,"That would explain how the camera can not see any other buildings around the object because they are all inside of it so no one is outside. They also could be inside of the butte because the planet is deadly for some paticular reason and they have shelter inside safely away. And another reason is because inside of the planet there may be some source of running water that is keeping them alive.
+
+Although this could not work because they more than likely would have gotten a picture of a martian outside doing something. And they would need some source of water which has already dried up on the outside of the planet ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+131b686c9a6b,500F35F18E1F,"In the end it is not possible that the mesa is an alien artifact and is instead just a butte or a mesa that happens to like a face. Because the clearer picture shows that it now looks nothing like a face, water stopped flowing on the red planet a long time ago, and Earth also has these land forms all over the place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1a173caf3df4,50122C17BAD4,Today I'm writing about The Challenge of Exploring Venus. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3fba466a3c68,50122C17BAD4,"Venus is sometimes called the ""Evening Star"". Its one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from the sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.
+
+First, there's a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we expreinced on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liqefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather presnt additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.
+
+However, peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atomosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of Venus.
+
+Last, NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important rolein the 1940s during World War 2. The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f90afea870a2,50122C17BAD4,"Finally, I'm talking about all the things i talked about in my paragraphs. I talked about Venus and it's nickname, the amosphere percent, orbiting and hovering and then the NASA. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2cb20f131349,505E8295E792,"The selctions I just read contain one common subject:people drive less cars now in the first and second selection both talk about how some neighborhoods ban the use of cars on certian or all days. In the first selection In german suburb, life goes on without cars the author Elisabeth Rosenthal states "" 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there."" In other words they either had a car but sold it to move or they never had a car to begin with.
+
+In selection 2, it talks about how people are not evven allowed to drive cars on certain days of the week. In paragraph 2 the authour says ""On Monday motorists with even numbered license plates are ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine.""
+
+The final 2 selections discuss how studies show that people in America are driving less and less as time passes by. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cdbc3dc9dc6,505E8295E792,I think we shoud do whatever we think is right.    ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b28d3db178eb,507CBD8E9670,"Studying planets is often hard because of the conditions in space, and also on the planet Venus there are also very harsh conditions that humans cannot survive. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d037f16412ae,507CBD8E9670,Exploring Venus can be a very risky planet for us to expore until we get better technology. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+745e637a8c63,507CBD8E9670,"Venus is often reffered to as Earth's twin because it is the closest planet to be like Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Venus would be hard to expore becuase of the planet's suface reaching up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet of solar system and if we tried to land a rover there the metal would just liquify because of the extreme temperature's. NASA however, still wants to try to study the planet but they would have to hover over Venus because of the extreme conditions on the planet's surface. Even at 30 plus miles in the air in Venus the temperatures can reach up to 170 degrees Fahrenheit. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Rendering standard of photography and videography ineffective. The solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth's level.
+
+More importantly, reasearchers cannot take samples of rock, gas,or anything else, from a distance. Threfore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Many reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow the machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1bbf91b198e4,508DB90F68C7,I think using this technology in a classroom would be a huge breakthrough. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+29c43bad378d,508DB90F68C7,Teachers wouldn't have to work as hard to figure out what he or she needs to do to help a student learn what they need to learn. This technology can tell what their emotional state is when in the classroom. If they are bored they might not like the way their teacher is teaching them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04e14ff96055,508DB90F68C7,"So the teacher can modify the way she teaches that specific lesson, so that the student has a better attitude toward that subject. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b91db48f022,508DB90F68C7,"This technology can also help councelers talk to the students that might be having personal problems like bullies, or family issues at home. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11b9cb8e00d7,508DB90F68C7,"Kids wouldn't be able to hide their emotions as well with this techlology being in every classrom. For example with a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major, and another muscle called the risorius. You cant download the software on a normal computer, so schools would have to pay for the device its-self. It would be extremely expensive but it would help many students in classrooms, or some that need counceling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+17b9115bc961,508DB90F68C7,"Humans perform this type of calculation every day, for instance when you ask a friend if they are ok, because they look depressed or angry. We can perform this calculation as accurately as the current technology we have now. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdc8565564b6,508DB90F68C7,For example Leonardo da Vinci used this type of calculation and knew exactly how her face needed to look in order to get the emotions he was looking for. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f757105165a1,508DB90F68C7,"
+In conclusion this technology has many benefits for students and children that need counceling for personal problems, and or family problems at home. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eba80d7bde99,509A6BA813C0,Cars good or bad. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f3bc269abe4a,509A6BA813C0,Some citys and some subrbs say yes ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cd83cd72596e,509A6BA813C0,"In France or in Vauban a suburban area in germany. such as in Paris frances the somg became to thike so for a few days they made moterd vehicles illegile and with doing that the somg cleard up pulotion went down and paris beasy streets wear feild with the silent sounds of bikes, scate boards and scaters. In Vauban a suburban area in Germany the streets are feild with kids and bikes and scaters of plenty in this suburban area moter vehicles of all kinds are illegle and the only place to park are in socure parking grages on out scurst of the suburbes. And in bogota Colombia there is car free day which is a program to get people to get out and injoy the freash air and it hopfully going to spreed to other country. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+708837af2c55,509A6BA813C0,So will cars become a thing of the past or will they just go green lets see what the future brings ous.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+42c4342e4a16,50ABF43C3323,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" a writer states that scientists are trying to study the planet Venus. In his article, he claims that while it is very risky, it may be worth it in the end. he also gives details about how dangerous it really is, and what the planet might have been at one point in time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+796577325860,50ABF43C3323,"The writer claims that Venus is referred to as Earth's ""twin''. But the only evidence he gives to back up this claim is that ""Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of desnity and size."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5b95675885d8,50ABF43C3323,"but in reality, Earth and Venus are very differnet. Earth is much safer in terms of temperature, pressure, and gas compaired to Venus. Venus has a blanket of gas that covers it that is, ""almost 97 percent carbon dioxide."" Plus, on its surface, ""temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit."" with the level of carbon dioxide and the ragging heat that it has, nothing is safe for long on Venus, especially humans. He does state that several spacecrafts have attempted to land on Venus, and only lasted a few hours, but he doesnt state what happened to them. most people would guess that they just melted entirely because of the extreme heat, which is most likely what happened, but we don't know for sure. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f29048d3a5e1,50ABF43C3323,"Not only is high temperatures and extreme pressures an issue, he also states that there are volcanoes and major earthquakes that happen, plus lightning is constant as well ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f7085e230b8,50ABF43C3323,"there is no context to whether or not scientists are trying to figure out what causes the the powerful earthquakes to happen, or why lightning strikes frequently happen ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5eeb147091c7,50ABF43C3323,"He also states that, ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life."" But there is nothing that follows it that claims what happened or could have happened to cause high pressures, high temperatures, and a high level of carbon dioxide to form. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7fa994c2e144,50ABF43C3323,"While scientists believe that Venus was at one point like earth, there are some facts that show that it has the looks of earth in some ways. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f2cb0675e88b,50ABF43C3323,"the writer says that Venus, ""has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."" These features are exactly what earth has as well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74126c229717,50ABF43C3323,"But there could be more than what meets the eye. In parapgraph six, the writer says that,"" peering a Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions becuase most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere."" ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5613eee2c9a9,50ABF43C3323,"This issue puts a damper on scientists ability to study the planet. But thats just it, what are scientists trying to study. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5867f9872557,50ABF43C3323,"The article says,""Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.'' Which is great they are working on that, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e1506958d3e3,50ABF43C3323,"but what are they trying to collect, find, or explore. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+5f536c98f1fe,50ABF43C3323,"Overall, the article is good, but there needs to be more detail in what is happening. they need information on what scientists are specifically trying to study, what they are looking for, and more detail on how they are progressing in studying Venus. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4ca2811e380a,50ABF43C3323,"With more details about what they are trying to find, it would be easier to evaluate whether or not the scientist efforts are really worth it, or just a waste of time. A planet that is inhabitable by humans or anything living is already a risk as is.       ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fac489cada1b,50F1D8786126,"In the article ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile,¨ the author tells us that with technology that we have today they can see her have a full smile. The way she looks tell people that she not to comforable about something. With the special work of Computers they can change they ways she feels and look. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+864bc6104152,50F1D8786126,The three reasons about how to ¨Make Mona Lisa Smile¨ is facial expressions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ced2bb31129,50F1D8786126,emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd9f27df32d6,50F1D8786126,3-D computers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af564217f2bb,50F1D8786126,What so wonder well know about Mona Lisa is her face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09946bae5e93,50F1D8786126,"That is, hiding how she feels by putting on a fake smile. She shows tons of facial expressions to show people how she feels. Most of it is happines by 83 percent, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Seeing the different characteristics that she has of facial muscle. While often shows vary of expressions that preforms a persons feelings. The reason Leonardo da Vinci´s painted Mona Lisa,he had studied human anatomy and convey speficc emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0c0bcb41936,50F1D8786126,"Seeing that their are six basic emotions like happines, surprised, anger, disgust, fear and sadness ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12d074275837,50F1D8786126,Using those to associated every characteristic of the facial muscles and using them on Mona Lisa. With new software it can recongize Mona Lisa emotions. Which can actually calculate emotions of others. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89db43bd55a3,50F1D8786126,"An by now, knowing that we have new techonlogy like 3-D printers they can give Mona Lisa emotions. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+533de9dc03a0,50F1D8786126,"The computer can construt a 3-D modle with all 44 muscles that must be moved like human muscles. The creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is by Dr. Paul Eckman. Which Computers can give the a certain look or emotion. The software stores similar anatomical information called electronic code. But only speacil computers can make people have emotions and faical features, not our normal PC at home. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73c1973253c2,50F1D8786126,"The way people express their feelings and emotions, can show everyone how you feel about certain things. People who will try to hid their emotions are very fond of themselves for not expressing it.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8fefb7de5711,5145FF65E5BE,Do you know that sometime human will not be living on Earth ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6376de71e9e0,5145FF65E5BE,Earth has limit. So we have to think about the future and implement it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+84bc5f2e5152,5145FF65E5BE,"First, the author says ""Venus, sometimes called the ""Evening Star."" Before Venus is called actually a planet, Venus was not popular. Venus and it was not called anything. But after Venus had called a planet, many things have been discovering bu scientist or other. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionary the closest in distance too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cb3bda62388,5145FF65E5BE,"It means we have a possibility to live in there. Veuns still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Again, we need to find the another place to live for the future. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6826d36cf223,5145FF65E5BE,"If we leave this problem as it is, every people will die because Earth is warming up year to year and we are on the crisis. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07d7cea2da53,5145FF65E5BE,"Secound, we have startedthe project for travel to planet which is not Earth that is easily to go. The problem and NASA have a relationship as traveling planet. NASA had done a lot of project about space. NASA also has one particulaly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6974aa0a3b18,5145FF65E5BE,"It is not easy to travel to Venus or another planet, but we have possibility because of them skill. It is survivable for humans. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a0ca2be848b,5145FF65E5BE,"Finally, the auther says,""Venus would need to get up close and parsonal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+efe47f6f5845,5145FF65E5BE,"We need to think about it. If we could live in Venus, it must be same as Earth, because there is the enviroment like this that we live. We alive. We have ocean for water, sun light, plants, oxygen, houses, foods, or something. We have to think about these problem, too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7619de9b158f,5145FF65E5BE,"It is not far from right now to travel to Venus and we could it, we could get a chance to live Venus. If we can, we should be more comfortable. We need to study Venus and teach many people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+61c886834926,514ADDA113FD,"That Venus is the closest plant to earth,almost has the same density and size to earth but is the second planet away from the sun. It can go up to 800 degress fahrenheit on a average scale has 90 times more atmospheric pressure than earth can crush a submarine that is bulit to wistand the water pressure deep below. Venus is more hotter than mercury which is the closest plant to the sun has erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lightning dispiet the harsh elements and lack of life support. Has some similary features to earth like valleys,mountains,and craters. NASA is planing to send humans to Venus to study it's natural elements to see if it's suitable for humans.
+
+NASA is still planing on making a trip to Venus but it will be a diffuclt change to acivemen do to it's harsh climate. Their plan is to sent scientists to float above the landscape. But the ship orbiting above the planet can only provide limited sight on the ground because most light couldn't go through the dense of the atmosphere. They could not take any miterals from Venus they have to get up close and personal to the ground dispiet the harsh cilmate. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels not easy conditions but should be survivable for humans. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29637003554b,51634BBDF223,the author using specfic details from studies and historical records to create a claim about how exploring venus is hard due to the harsh conditions ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+61ba01f9c332,51634BBDF223,"kn the planet but he also comes up with idea of exploring venus from the sky in blimp like vechile to avoid the harsh ground enviroment. solution to the hostile conditions "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae4a25a28783,51634BBDF223,"""on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, "" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1b49575d9b1,51634BBDF223,"the author also descripes how the the in human condions such as the lack of oxygen, high pressure, extreme heat and erupting volancoes, powerfull earth wuakes and frequent lighting strikes are the reasons why no manned missions to venus had, are , or will ever take place. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea8660323d3e,51634BBDF223,""" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere. On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."" 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b78211b3fd64,51CCAD86D2F2,"I think that FACS is very useful technology, that could benefit classrooms everywhere. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+152c649513ba,51CCAD86D2F2,"It, as the article talks about, can help students if there getting lost or bored. By just adjusting it's teaching algorythms to better help the student. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+908b225e91e7,51CCAD86D2F2,"During everyday life, we look at others faces and can most of the time see how they are feeling. If your friend has a frown on their face, then you can try and use comforting tactics and try to help them in anyway. And you use these tactics because you know what they are feeling. And FACS can do the same thing!
+
+If a student is having trouble in school and there learning style might be different. The FACS can adapt to that students learning style or mood. And help them better than just mindlessly teaching them, and not changing anything thats going on. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83344545a120,51CCAD86D2F2,FACS can be extremely useful in schools all over the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+580b99c86598,51CCAD86D2F2,And can make students and their learning enviroments more flexible and effective. Which in turn with help a gargantuan amount in them having a succeful career. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3671efd1ced5,51CCAD86D2F2,"Because students should come first, they are the worlds future. And anything we can do to assist them or better their education, should be done. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+40e2c29dc922,52293439CC0D,The Author supports the idea of studying venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1810438d2ed2,52293439CC0D,"In paragraph 2, ""the author says that numerous factors conmtribute to Veunus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study on"". Another reason why from the author that humans should study venus and wothy pursuit. In paragraph 3, sentence 4 ""it says that the conditions are far moire extreme than anything humans can study on encounter"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+22274355ee2b,52293439CC0D,in sted of calling it venus they call is Evening star and it is one of the brightest of the light in the night sky ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2faa18d7ec00,52293439CC0D,it proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. But in my own words i think it is a good idea for humans shoukld study venus because it gives you fun facts about it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f02225929e2a,52293439CC0D,"How i know that is because in paragraph 8, the last sentcene its talking about you get to travle on earth and you it to see whats beyond you should not be limited by dnager or anything else. And another evidence you get to learn about new things in life and it can be a challenge for you in life also ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1937bb2fd935,52293439CC0D,My conclusion to this hole essay is if you can explorie anything in life then you can take a risk and in doing a challenge on exploring venus or another name for it Evening star. Not just because it can give you a fun fact it can give you a differnet experion on other people and you can show other people that there can be a differnce in everythiung that you can do. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+21c6b6da5339,52315F217E9A,"If my principal had decided that
+
+ALL
+
+students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity for example students could participate in sports, work on the year book, or serve on the student council. I would strongly disagree ",Position,Adequate,,,
+39861bb8d787,52315F217E9A,there is people like me that dont want to do sports and would just rather go straight home after along day of school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53fb61cf967d,52315F217E9A,some could not physically do sports or stuff like that ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+20b195ff7a0f,52315F217E9A,"lastly i think i will just make students mad so you will have a lot of students yelling and talking back and not doing what they are supposed to do. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3abe1ebe1206,52315F217E9A,I don't think you should be forced to play a sport or something like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88ad1e05dbfc,52315F217E9A,"because if you want to do it you will do it so there is no need to be force by principal. After school people just want to go home school is long enough so having an after school activity will just make some people upset and because I will be mad if i get forced to participate in an activity that will take time out of my day, and besides people have stuff to do also after school, some people dont have time for that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15db73fd77e4,52315F217E9A,Some students have disabilities so some of them won't be able to do that stuff and they have to go straight home after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19419c639cf6,52315F217E9A,i'm just saying if the principal does that there will be a lot of complaints for example why do they have to do it and we have stuff to do this is not fare. If all the students will be forced to do something like that they will all be tired the next day because some people are just not used to it like me for example. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4c888fb90f2,52315F217E9A,"I dont think it is wrong sports are very good for you for example sports are good exercise and you could try something new, and you could even learn that you like a sport, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8955c52a0432,52315F217E9A,but if some one wants to do an activity or play sports they can do it on there own they dont have to be forced for that stuff if you want to do it you will do it if you dont you shouldn't be forced that just going to make the students mad and aggressive ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1577712056c5,52315F217E9A,That should be something you supposed to do on your own. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2de0e7333367,52579F4BBE4E,"Most schools require students to complete a variety of projects during their summer break like reading books or completing a math packet. These projects help students continue their learning away from school, except the only difference is that they have all of summer to do it compared to having a due date within a week. Some projects prepare students for the upcoming school year while others act like reminders so that students won't forget what they learned in the past year. Though some believe that summer projects should be student-designed, others will argue that summer projects should be teacher-designed in order to get the best learning experience while away from school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a786c534ecf1,52579F4BBE4E,Summer projects should be designed by teachers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2ea5b9c7a0b9,52579F4BBE4E,it will help students prepare for the upcoming school year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f4fc3df1337a,52579F4BBE4E,"Some students may panic because they won't understand the new material or that they will fall behind in the class because they don't remember how solve a simple question, but if teachers design a project based on their class, it gives students an idea of what to expect. For example, a student will be taking Algebra 2 in the upcoming school year, but doesn't know anything about the class. A simple teacher-designed project that could help a student is a packet with math problems from every unit with examples that explains how to do it, so when students go back to school, they aren't completely blindsided by the new concept. Most schools, mainly high school and middle school, have reading assignments that students must complete before the school year. Reading projects could range from reading a certain book and writing an essay about it to completing a reading bingo where students have to complete a series of reading tasks of their choosing. Yes, the word project seem bland and a complete waste of time while students are on their break, but it doesn't have to be boring as long as it serves the purpose of helping students learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ec183fbdb27,52579F4BBE4E,"I can personally say that teacher-designed summer projects help prepare students for the upcoming school year. Once in middle school, there was a reading project assigned during the summer where students had to pick a book of their choosing that they can connect to and make notes on the side. I decided to choose a book about sports because as an athlete, I could relate to bits of the story. There were a few new things from the book that I learned about, so I wrote little notes on the pages and highlighted the text. After completing the project and returning to school, the teacher then told the class that the purpose of the project was to prepare for annotations, a concept new to students, and to help understand how to compare books that would be read throughout the school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+efe8d5f9ef30,52579F4BBE4E,"Over the summer, students would forget the material they learned from the past school year, which makes it hard for them to pick up once back at school. Students also learn at different rates meaning that some are more advanced than others. These are another few reasons as to why summer projects should be teacher-designed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fde6feccab65,52579F4BBE4E,Teachers can design a project that helps them see where students are in their learning process and what they remember from past classes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+110e503c3f15,52579F4BBE4E,"For example, if a student takes a language, like Spanish, teachers can design a project where students must write a story in Spanish based on a given prompt. The project could include requirements that were taught from previous classes with some new concepts added in to see if an individual knows new concepts that will be taught in their future class. This will help teachers understand how they can help a student and where they stand in their learning process. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+28d904ca0aa7,52579F4BBE4E,"Although these are valid reasons as to why summer projects should be teacher-designed, others will disagree and believe that summer projects should be student-designed. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5a30ad74cc60,52579F4BBE4E,"The purpose of summer is so that students can take a break from all the stress that they have experienced during the school year, so a great way to learn and be stress free while doing so is a student-designed project. Students could be assigned a project for a class, but it could be of their choosing. For example, students could be assigned a project with no requirements where they have to make a presentation on anything that interests them, as long as there was a learning process. This will spark different ideas because all students have different backgrounds and their own interests like sports, cooking, or a job that they have. Though these topics are far from being similar, they all have a learning process. Since the project would be based on an individual's choice, it would be less stressful because it is something they are familiar with and know how to work around. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+683aa225a527,52579F4BBE4E,"Yes, these are two very different sides with different opinions, but they both have a learning experience. Students still get the continuous learning process throughout their break while teachers can see where a student's learning capability is. Teacher-designed projects are stricter meaning that students would probably benefit from it more, while student-designed projects are less stressful based on a students choice. Even though most individuals would disagree saying that summer projects should be student-designed, teacher-designed projects are still the best option to get the best experience for learning new things and reviewing old material. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c2b7c629d068,527EB3C89F2F,To start this off it would be a great idea to study venus because it's some much different then earth ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eeca5c8d8ec6,527EB3C89F2F,When looking at it from earth soemthimes it called Evening stars. Which is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b25b08b4448,527EB3C89F2F,Venus is alot different but at the same time alot alike. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5a8e7f458d3a,527EB3C89F2F,"Venus is like earths twin its closest planet to earth in desity and size. Sometimes we arent as close to venus as we can be to mar. Mars, Earth, and Venus go around the sun at differsnt speed even though they are close to one an another. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f66fdbdbcc49,527EB3C89F2F,"To conclude these two planets are very close but canbe very different. Earth has two planet that arent alike and different then it. Mars and venus, but these three can be really similar but very different in many ways. We have life here on Earth but mars and venus do not that we know of. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8993b6b12d7f,5310CCBD5B81,"Venus is a planet in our Solar System, Venus gets often referred as the Earth's ""Twin"" due to the density, size and occasionally the closets in distance too ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+935130d10d82,5310CCBD5B81,we will never realize or really understand the stuggles and experiments people have to go through just to visit Venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ed7ba5475d8,5310CCBD5B81,"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5358df6ad7b5,5310CCBD5B81,"Its not any bodys fault that nothing good has come from Venus, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4cfb446e0ed6,5310CCBD5B81,"Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine also a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Jet airplanes travel and fly over many storms. NASA is working on more apporaches to study Venus and learn more , the good and the bad. They have enormously powerful computers that works with mechanical ,pressure, heat and other forces.
+
+""vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way."" temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit so humans would feel nice and tostey but its also not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0df87eb8d1b9,5310CCBD5B81,The Challenges of Exploring Venus can be very scary but also very worth it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3f4ba30349d1,533B0CD8AB4D,"Imagine a city empty of cars and the sounds of bicycles and the sound of chattering children drown out the sound of the occasional motor, This is the city of Vauban. This ""experimental"" district on the ouskirts of Freiburg. Elisabeth Rosenthal, author of
+
+In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars stated ""Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district...Vauban's streets are completely ""car-free"" —except the main thotoughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs. Car ownership is allowed but there are two places to park —large garages at the edge of the development where a car owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.""
+
+This action has inspired some other areas to do the same, As said by Rosenthal, ""Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of a growing trend in Europe, The United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called ""smart planning."""". Now these have been a bit more of pre-emptive measures against Pollution and economic inflation there are those who have taken actions after the fact, Robert Duffer, author of
+
+Paris bans driving due to smog has said ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city."" Now here is where Paris decided to do something silly. ""On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-eruo fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day."" as stated by Duffer. Now alot of people may not of heard about this or thought it was a joke, Duffer wrote ""Almost 4,000 drivers were fined... 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine."" To the people who had heard of this such as companies who their main function is driving from place to place had complained, ""Delivery Companies complained of lost revenue, while exceptions for plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers."" said by Duffer. All of these exceptions that were given out sound as though they are personal transport vehicles that the passengers could just as easily take the public transport.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+afa3384dfec3,5353165D1A68,"How much do we know of Venus? Not much except it´s a planet in space along with the other planets. But who knows what might be in that planet. Venus could have a lot we didn´t think it had, but no one, including myself, have ever study the planet at all. But we can now and see what lies in the planet known as Venus. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9db2b038a092,5353165D1A68,"First off, Venus is one of the brightest points of light, making it simple for stargazers. Often called the Ëvening Star"" but the nickname can be misleadinng since the planet Venus is...well a planet. While also very simple to see from the distant safe advantage of Earth, it proves to be a very challenging place to examine more closer. It makes you wonder what´s even that planet to study about.
+
+Next, Venus´ surface has their temperature average over 800 degrees and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience on our planet. The planet´s conditions Venus has is way more extreme than we thought it would be that we wouldn´t be accustomed to the second we even try to get there. Beyond the high pressure and the heat, Venusian geology and weather present some impediments like volcanoes that can erupt, earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to seek land onto its surface. No wonder why Venus is fascinatiing in some people´s eyes.
+
+Lastly, going over to Venus with a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can only have a limit insight on ground conditions since most of the forms can´t penetrate the dense atmosphere. It´s important to know that researchers cannot take samples of any rock, grass, or anything else in the distance. So if trying to seek to a conduct would have to resolve in getting close and personal despite any risks to do it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4e47200071d2,5353165D1A68,And that´s what makes Venus the planet that it is today. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7f5058f510d6,535408616BBE,Studing Venus is a good idea because they is so much people have to learn about it and peope dont. You could learn and knoe so much about Venus. Its a good idea he has so much on it and it good be good stuff that no one knows about. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+02c1e0f19f04,535408616BBE,Its is known as earths twin. They have sent many space craft all of them have only lasted a hour or so. Thats why they havent send a lot of people up there to stay. It has the hotest tempeter of any planet. They have talked about more visites to Venus. It formiler futers as earth. They want to send people to Venus to study it. THey want to have a car that well be able to just say off the ground so they can go there. They cant take samples or rock or gas that far away from it they wouyld have to be up close. They are working on other wys to be able to go up there and learn more about it. It has went up on how many people want to go up there and explore. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a1714914993a,535408616BBE,I think the arthor suported the idea well ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0cc9ea60a1b2,535408616BBE,I think that in the next cople of years people well be able to go there an resurch and get the stuff they want from there. Like studing the rock and whatever ese they have up there. He made a lot of good statments about how we wouldnt be able to get thst close because the remputer is so hot. Even if you whernt thst close it would still be 170 degrees and that is still really hpot and can hurt someone. they would have to figure out a outfit or suit that can make it do its not so hot so they can go up there and resurch. They would have to make a rocket that could float because it the rocket touched Venus it would melt and they would die up there. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac2f34666cdc,535408616BBE,But over all i think the aother made good statments about it and what would have to hapen to go up there. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66d6cd031f53,535D71E8C000,"Families should have their homes with their cars under their garage. Car ownerships is allowed, but there are only two places to park. When i had a car i was always tense. But passenger cars they are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. Up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united states. Its basic precepts are being adapted around the world in attempts to make surburbs more accessible to public transportation. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs , where middle-class families from chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00adb8e8c324,535D71E8C000,They shouldnt even limit cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8bd4cf8ef75a,535D71E8C000,"It will be harder for parents to do what they have to do. Especially if you have a family and walking a distance when your car could be at your house with you. Its not right to have car owner space along with a home because some people cant afford to pay all that money. If people give up their cars just to move. While there have have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking ,planners are now taking concepts to the suburbs. Vauban may be the nost advanced experiment in low-car suburban life. I dont think stores should be placed a walk way on a main street rather than in malls along some distant highway. Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill be approved. Street parking,driveways and home garages should be forbidden in this experimental new district . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d086a6fddb50,53653D0A6CBD,you should join the Seagoing Cowboys ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b0d23ad637be,53653D0A6CBD,It gives you a great chance to see the sea ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d89639d706d4,53653D0A6CBD,"You get on a boat and sail and you get to see serval places , like China , Greece , and Eroupe . Those three are just a few places you get to see and they are absoultly amazing . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d42d848bfd13,53653D0A6CBD,You get to see animals and take care of them for a long while . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9cc700daba79,53653D0A6CBD,Of coruse you have some chores and have to clean up after them but it's not really a big deal especially if your a animal lover . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+792d187713f8,53653D0A6CBD,it is very dangreous ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+88f9ac6f1f21,53653D0A6CBD,you are in the military but wouldn't you risk it to save others . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccc72b847a9a,53653D0A6CBD,"To be brave , and save a life . I don't know about you but that is a very mobil act . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f585da8b7681,53653D0A6CBD,"The cons of being a part of Seagoing Cowboys Program is you have to work very hard , you have to do your part . Anthother thing if you get seasick it would be extra challenging , because your on a boat for serval mothes and weeks at a time ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+55956b5315bc,53653D0A6CBD,"like luke you could very easly slip and fall and break you ribs . I mean he could of died . It's very dangoues espeically if it rains , because that doesn't help , an the water is very cold so hope you don't fall in . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33208774b01a,53653D0A6CBD,"To be in the militalry , you have to be very courages and very brave . If you think about it it's really worth it because you are saving lives and thats why most people do it , to help people and to save lives . I think personally that it's worth it I would love to save someones life and do a very courages deed like that , it takes guts . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e31e07d4f3c9,53653D0A6CBD,I'm a animal lover so that would be amazing . An I love to travel I would love to travel like that . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc9944c7e5de,53986279FB2A,"Luke reason he joined the program was because he had two part time joby and his friends where going and they asked him if he wanted to go. And Luke could not say no so he went. And he would be missing an opportunity in his life time. Lukes 2 part time jobs where working at a store and a bank.
+
+It was 1945 world war 2 Luke and Don signed up to feed the animals. They has to fees 335 horses. They also had to feed cows, and mules that they had to feed.
+
+It was August 1945 , The boys just recived their order reports to new Orlans.
+
+Luke is now 18 year sold Luke said that they had a sight seeing of Europe and China. It took 2 weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean. And It took a month to get to China.
+
+Luke surved as a night watch man. He had to feed the animals every hour. So that way they did not have to starve. And cry all night for food and water to eat and drink.
+
+A small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic.
+
+He was happy to be alive. But he couldn’t work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.
+
+Luke also found time to have fun and he got to play volleyball, table tennis,boxing and fencing but this happend after they unloaded the animals then they got to have fun and enjoy their time.
+
+Luke crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and he crossed the PAcific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War 2.                                                 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59d9665197e2,53B076D547AE,"Imagine that you are a student, everyday you come home, do your homework, and think about how lousy your day has been, boring right? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6dc8f642665b,53B076D547AE,"Well, having extracurricular activities after school can help with that. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+de2018a4c509,53B076D547AE,Extracurricular activities can help a student make friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d49d79ae7f51,53B076D547AE,"have fun, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8629e47bf141,53B076D547AE,put students in a positive attitude. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+293db6576296,53B076D547AE,"Some students do not have many friends because they do not interact with people outside of school. When doing extracurricular activities, you are surrounded by people that like doing the same things as you. For example, I am a student that has made many friends from doing dance. Everyday, after school, I go to my dance classes and feel loved because I am surrounded by people just like me. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+351cabefb65d,53B076D547AE,"People tend to be much happier when they are surrounded by people they love and are doing what they love. Even on very difficult days, doing extracurricular activities can make your day much brighter! I take dance after school everyday and no matter how difficult my day has been, dancing with my friends always puts me in a better mood. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dea27336cd66,53B076D547AE,"While I think that having extracurricular activities after school is a great idea, some might think that it could take too much time and iterefere with homework time. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9e08347181d4,53B076D547AE,"Well, usually, students take a long time to do their homework because they do not want to. They want to have fun! Everyone wants to have fun, nobody wants to be stuck at a desk doing homework. Extracurricular activities are fun and do not take up a massive amount of time. Students will still have time to do their homework after having some fun doing what they love ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+24a52e6f6740,53B076D547AE,"Some people might say that some extracurricular activities, like sports, can cause injuries ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d171f1ea324e,53B076D547AE,"Although you might get hurt, it does not happen very often. Not all extracurricular activities give the oppritunities to get hurt, but they all give the oppritunity to have fun! ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+11076eaee702,53B076D547AE,Extracurricular activities after school can be very beneficial to ones life by making them live a happier life. You can also make many friends that have the same interests like you. Activities after school can allow you to have fun. Extracurricular activities can really change someones life for the better.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bdfa96f2cbd6,53DE53537B56,"Many students would want to come up with their own thoughts on a summer project to have the motivation to complete the project, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6898ad4eb741,53DE53537B56,"make sure the topic they choose is interesting to them, and know exactly what their topic is about. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+74aaba8e45a8,53DE53537B56,"I believe that for students to complete a summer project, that the students should be the designers of the projects. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9fa86c609a13,53DE53537B56,I think that if the projects are student-designed that they will be in involved and will have the courage to work on the projects they designed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9e9e5a33aacb,53DE53537B56,"Students today are going to be more encouraged to finished and get done something they came up with. For example students don't like when teachers choose their project topics, research paper topics or group partners, because they would rather choose themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abb14cb300c2,53DE53537B56,"Also students that know their topic are going to be more aware. Student-designed projects are coming from the students therefore, students are going to know all aspects and components ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8715f397dcd6,53DE53537B56,"Not all students stay on track with projects however, if it's something they designed students can't say they were not aware of or ""didn't know what to do ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+cc03ed1c0e14,53DE53537B56,As well as choosing something interesting to grade age kids. Most commonly students do not interact or don't want to interact with subjects or topics that don't interest them. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+89aa97acfed1,53DE53537B56,"Keeping their attention will attract them to finish. Many topics would not satisfy all variety of students so in order to keep all students interested and willing to do a summer project, letting summer projects be student-designed is a brilliant idea. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96db49cf54df,53DE53537B56,"However since students would be the designers and come up wih all the thoughts and ideas, teachers would need to revise their project thoughts and make sure all project topics are project efficient. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f7e9a36caded,53DE53537B56,"Having students design and build onto their thoughts could save teachers from having to come up with ideas, help new ideas, and new flow from one another. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+70d8b0834f87,53E064890ABC,"The principal should create a rule for each student, requiring that they participate in at least one extracurricular activity. With the number of clubs available for students to participate in there is no reason that each student shouldn't be able to find the activity that best suits them ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+66372b5ee67b,53E064890ABC,". If each student was to be part of a club at their school, they would be given access to pursue their hobbies with their classmates ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c7e43a95d0fc,53E064890ABC,This safe environment to pursue interests and hobbies would allow students to explore all kinds of activities and try to see which activities they would like to dedicate themselves too ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7923471898c2,53E064890ABC,By allowing students to figure out their interest they would be able to show off their uniqueness and add diversity to the school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dbd165a7604c,53E064890ABC,There are various reasons to mandate one extracurricular activity and the principal should have no problem enacting this idea. ,Position,Effective,,,
+bff025d42c40,53E064890ABC,"By enacting this policy of having each student participate in an extracurricular activity, each student is given an opportunity to explore any pre-exsisting passions that they have. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+34100be12fde,53E064890ABC,"If a student has had a passion ever since they were a little kid and know that they would like to join a club that builds on that, this policy would help do that. For example, if a student knew they wanted to be part of a club that helps them build on an interest of computer science they would be given the chance to join a club such as the Robotics team. They would be able to use their previous knowledge and joy for their topic, to elevate the team to greater success. If the school was able to bring a high number of dedicated students together to join clubs they would see vast improvements in the success of their activities. These students would be given even more motivation to join the club they love, bringing the best out of them and allow them to join clubs that they know they have interest in. Even though there are some students that know exactly what they want to do and want to dedicate all their time to one club, some students are not like that. Many students would like to explore various clubs and see which one is best for them, creating another reason to enact this policy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+afe7140a9a35,53E064890ABC,"With this policy students who are unsure of what their true passion is, will be more inclined to find which club they like and dedicate themselves to that. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e677fc9a0c30,53E064890ABC,"Without this policy students who say they want to join clubs at their school are not motivated to act on what they said, instead choosing to go home and do nothing. Currently there are hundreds students in school that say they would like to join one of the various clubs offered, but find themselves simply riding the bus home and spending the rest of the day on their phone. This occurs due to a lack of motivation from anyone in school urging the students to join an extracurricular activity. Parents can only do so much for their kids when it comes to what their kids do in school, and some kids find ways to get out of joining any clubs. This is why schools need to put this policy in place to not allow their students talents go too waste. Not only would this policy help students explore interests they have, it would help everyone see how unique and diverse each person is. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+38e38b1b649e,53E064890ABC,If each student was doing at least one after-school activity students will be able to show their uniqueness and collectively create a diverse learning experience for everyone at school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+049ccd24088d,53E064890ABC,"With every student participating in a club students would spread out amongst the various clubs offered at their school, creating groups of dedicated people who are trying to learn as much as possible to that topic. Currently schools face the problem of kids all gravitating towards the same clubs, such as Science Olympiad and Math Counts. If students don't get into these clubs or feel as though they aren't going to be able to do anything with these highly competitive clubs, they drop out and find themselves having nothing to do outside of school. Many students feel defeated and neglected after they don't do well in these clubs and find it hard to join any other club, for fear that the same tale may happen again. Because of this, hundreds of students intellectual abilities are being wasted. The current issue we face is a lack of students joining clubs after they are shunned away from another club, that is why we need the policy of at least one extracurricular activity per student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c026546991ee,53E064890ABC,"
+The problem we face with not having a policy of each student participating in at least one after-school activity, is that we have students who are immensely talented who are not motivated enough to be a part of a club. If the school was to have this policy every student would benefit from it as they are given a far greater reason to join a club. With the various advantages of creating this policy and minor drawbacks, each school should at least make an attempt to enact a policy that would not only help students but the school as a whole. With students having the added motivation to join the clubs offered at their schools, with the added diversity to the school, there is no reason a school should make an attempt to complete a policy like this. The principal at all schools should try to implement a policy that makes students participate in the after-school offerings that their school has.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f735f7309c9d,5402D8B83297,Summer projects should be based on student designed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+623f4b00c0db,5402D8B83297,"The students will be able to decide what they want to do, how they can do it, and it will give them time to decide what there project would be based on ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bdba4f86c32,5402D8B83297,Most students tend to actually do work when they are allowed to chose what it is. Students usually like making their own decisions. It helps them focus much more better and they will be having a great way to show the teacher they know how to do projects on their own. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b87be6ea964e,5402D8B83297,One reason why I think student should design their project is because some students travel to another country. Sometimes to go visit family or to have new experience. If students are able to design their project they can make it based on If they went to a different country. They will be able to learn about there culture and how it is different from where the student is from. If they visit family from a different country they can have a little interview with there family and they can turn that into a project. It will give them so much options on what to do there projects on ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+296659f4a820,5402D8B83297,Being able to pick your own project is such a better experience because you will be learning new things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5422b8536c23,5402D8B83297,Another reason why I think Students should design their own projects is because teachers sometimes give their students a complicated project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae7e8f253772,5402D8B83297,Some students won't be able to understand what they are supposed to do. based on not understanding what the project is about they will end up giving up and not doing the project. Students making their own designed project would mean it would cause them to have to think more. They would have to gather a lot of information to make sure their project is good and filled with details. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe36ea39ad39,5402D8B83297,Therefore Teachers won't have to do so much work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2a9ea350a36,5402D8B83297,If students decide their project they would have to come up with many of decisions. Students would have so many great memories. Just by this one project many of things happen over summer it would be a good idea to use their experiences from summer on there project. As a student myself I would rather be able to pick my own project. It would let me learn new things and have much more better experience. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b3a7d18b4536,5402D8B83297,"Student should be able to design their own project. It would be fun for them to learn new things especially when it's by there decisions. They are able to think hard and decide what to do their topic on.
+
+They would have to put in much effort to be able to get a good grade. Teachers wouldn't have so much grading to do. The teachers will also be learning new things from the students. It's a once in a while when student decide a project. summer is supposed to be fun not stressful having a teacher design the project would make them give up and enjoy summer. Students should be able to decide there project especially since its summer.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ba3fda5aeaf8,5412AD81F965,It is very usual for school systems to assign students with a project over summer break. It is common for this project to be a long grueling book report or an assignment to research some far off place or historical happenstance that took place hundreds of years ago. These projects are often neglected by students till the end of summer due to them not enjoying or wanting to do the project ,Lead,Effective,,,
+df4a8a892c48,5412AD81F965,"If these projects were to have free choice for the student to talk about, research, or report on anything they want, it would most likely end up with the school having a bigger abundance of students doing their summer projects ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb0e9176e579,5412AD81F965,"the students could report on something they enjoyed and wanted to talk about. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7e00b2371f4,5412AD81F965,If they have the choice on the topic the students are more likely to enjoy the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8709a31f452a,5412AD81F965,Choosing the topic allows the student to truly express themselves and talk about something they enjoy. They won't feel as if they are being forced to do a topic they do not want to do. It will allow them to speak and explain something that they are passionate about. This will later help teachers learn more about what their students are interested in. If they are doing a project on something they enjoy it is likely they will put more effort into the project to make sure it is good work and not just some garbage quickly thrown together at the end of summer. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a39d1de50ca,5412AD81F965,Given the ability to choose their own topic students are more likely to actually do the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b86a916a3d17,5412AD81F965,They will have more motivation to do it because it can be on something they like. A lot of times teacher will get a lot of trashy work from students because they procrastinated the project all summer. The students will procrastinate the project till just a few days before school starts up because they do not enjoy the project topic. With the students given the ability to choose the topic there will be lowered procrastination in summer projects due to students enjoying the topic and wanting to do the work. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+47d93e07b812,5412AD81F965,"However, Students may still refrain from doing their projects. This is always true schools will always have some students who will not do their work especially summer projects. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ac3e7631b536,5412AD81F965,"But, schools will have a raise in student participation with the summer project if schools allow them choice of their own topic. Schools will notice students doing their summer projects that didnt do them the prior year when the topic was assigned. As well as letting the students choose their own topic schools are letting the students let their teacher know a little bit about themselves with whatever topic they choose. This allows the teachers to better understand their students before the year really kicks off. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+41a9e6104053,5412AD81F965,if a student is allowed the choice of topic for their summer project it would be better off for all parties ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac3f32b7859d,5412AD81F965,the students are more likely to do their project because it is something they want to do. Teachers would not be putting as many zeros in their grade book to start the year off. There would be an upsurge in the amount of effort students would be putting into their work. Teachers would also get to know their students in reading their summer projects and could use the information they learned about the student to better their schooling that year. All in all having a student choose the topic of their summer project would be a very positive aspect to a long timed disliked project.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e13f88fd3a1a,54351180CD4F,"Many have claimed that the human face found on Mars is an alien artifact, but how certain are they. According to NASA, the Face on Mars is just a rock formation that resembles the face of a human, but others may disagree. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+00e045f4a1fe,54351180CD4F,I believe that the Face found on Mars is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a395fcc5dd4d,54351180CD4F,"To further investiate this topic, we will begin by analyzing how the Face was formed and how it compares to lanforms on Earth, where it was located, and what causes others to believe that it is an alien artifact. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5484683de3e4,54351180CD4F,"Some might believe that the so called ""alien artifact"" was lefted behind by aliens ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f55dea2ac53d,54351180CD4F,", but NASA unveiled an image of the Face and this is what they came up with. According to the caption of the image, it noted a ""huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, annd mouth."" ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+89b6edf999ee,54351180CD4F,This image was even compared to natural landforms found on Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ceccd982497d,54351180CD4F,"According to the passage, the picture portrays the ""Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. The passage also claims that the image reminds him of the ""Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" and that the Face on Mars is about he same height of an isolated mesa- which is a landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc88e9695a46,54351180CD4F,The Face on Mars was located at 41 degress north martian latitude during the winter of April 1998. This time of the year was also considered to be the cloudiest time of year on the Red Planet ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea9579ee16d6,54351180CD4F,The fact that this image was found during the cloudiest time of year on Mars can affect the turn out of this theory ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37282101a69a,54351180CD4F,"A few scientists believed that the Face was an alien artifact, and photographing the Cydonia became one of the biggest priorities for NASA. As soon as the Viking mission was ended, the chief scientist of NASA's Mars Exploration Program stated that they ""photographed the Face as soon as they could get a good shot at it."" I believe they did this to clarify their foundings. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8457458398d,54351180CD4F,"As stated before, many people, including scientists, believe that the Face on Mars is an alien artifact and here are their reasons why ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+225c00892841,54351180CD4F,"As the photo of the Face on Mars was being taken, it was claimed that the ""camera on board MGS had to peer through the wispy clouds to see the Face,"" and according to skeptics, ""alien markings were hidden by haze."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab80e784e465,54351180CD4F,"This did not stop mission controllers, and they prepared to look again. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+581e8229ab28,54351180CD4F,"Garvin states that "" It's not easy to target Cydonia,"" and that its hardwork. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a96eb1652493,54351180CD4F,"Conspiracy theorists believe that the Face is ""bona-fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+126c30beb69c,54351180CD4F,"Now this may all sound convincing, but it was also added that you can discern things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, causing false illusions. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+47059511725d,54351180CD4F,"In conlusion, after analyizing the data and research given, I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Others may disagree, but it is all about your interprutation on the topic, and hopefully the evidence used to support my claims did just that.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a416c367ebc3,547C43CF3291,"to bein with the passage mainly states or really talk bout the things that make up the percent of cair pollution in the airlike 70 pecent of  and 57 percent of the cars moved car are better then bike because bike your pedaling cars your just pushing the gas and it makes you goes faster 12 pecent of the grenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes to passengers vars are most intensive in the united states all the cars since ww2 had been ways to move equipment to travel long places and miles it was used as the tranportation of amerin cars are the most unrelated.
+
+second of all levitttown and scardale newyork suburbs was a wide spread out homes and private tranportation bills were formed by mister goldberg he said 80 oercent of approriatins have law gone 20 percent to eachother transport the passage also say america have a air pollution record for the most bad pollution in the air in the lobal city wise they say in most cities and countries say for instance china have mor bike riders and walkers do the have cars that y they have so much money because they dint used up allof the observation they save thats why china nd places like africa are rich countries third of of all that why china nights be so cold thats why it dont bethat much sicness because every one know what it takes to not pollute the air and all kinds of nonpoticular things that america does to pollute our air 67 percent of vehicles and france is compared to 57.3 percent of our cars in 73 percent in london well anyways china have long cold nights because its not that much gas or pollution in the air to me and others all scientists thats a good thing.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f96c6137e095,5484CC372842,"Summer break is that time of the year where most students look forward to. Many are eager to sit back and relax, or enjoy their time with friends and family. Whatever it is, school is the last thing on their mind. It's the last thing on my mind too. Although that isn't always the case, there is always that one teacher that assigns projects over break. Summer projects are required through some schools to preserve their learning onto the next year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+dee0e5d5af3b,5484CC372842,"To make it more enjoyable, I believe that these summer projects should at least be student-designed for various reasons. ",Position,Effective,,,
+cbb14c5a9cbd,5484CC372842,"Summer break is the time where most students proceed to pursue hobbies, enjoy lifes moments, spend time with people that are cared about, and make memorial memories. Over break, students tend to discover their true passions and focus on what drives their interest. With projects being assigned, that can be tough and build a wedge between the situation. If summer projects were to be student-designed however, students can make it more personalized and just have fun with it. I believe making the summer projects more personalized to students, can really ease the stress and make it more enjoyable. Overall, it is summer break. As a student myself, a time where this applied to me was in the summer of my freshman year. My teacher had assigned a summer project where we had to determine the area of different shapes in any form. Art is a huge passion of mine and I wanted to engage more of it into my summer. I decided to paint an abstract painting with a variety of shapes; circles, triangles, squares, you name it. It turned out beautiful, I really enjoyed spending my time on something that was educating and delightful. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d6c8a1639842,5484CC372842,"Engaging learning with enjoyable hobbies can be beneficial for the teachers' satisfactory and the students. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d62981f3d2d,5484CC372842,"For most people, finding hobbies that are interesting can be challenging. Knowing myself, I need a sense of direction to know what my interests. It takes a bit of courage to try something new and actually enjoy it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8089fe4d82f1,5484CC372842,Student designed school projects can really help a student find his/her passions and learn something new along the way. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a4783c679d28,5484CC372842,"Although students might think making school projects student-designed is a good idea, teachers might not agree. Some students could take this their advantage, by making the project as simple and pointless as they want. This could necessarily not reach the teachers standards and question if the student even learned anything at all. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7c8feba2854b,5484CC372842,"Although this could be case, summer projects are indeed just summer projects and should not be taken seriously. Summer should be the time where students can have the choice of doing what they want. If projects are mandatory for teachers, then it can be arranged, but it shouldn't put unnecessary stress on students. Especially during summer break. Teachers should observe how well the student comes up with ideas and how well they execute their projects, it's more exciting that way. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+f179ab9ec5cb,5484CC372842,"Having being said, student designed projects are better for both the student and the teacher. It allows students to have more freedom and personalize their studies with their occupation. Teachers will also have the chance to determine the students personality and see what the student is like. It shows how bright a student's mind can be and how well their work ethics are. Teachers should give students a chance to show off themselves and appreciate for what they are able to achieve in. It can also be a fun learning experience for many. Not only will these student-designed projects continue their learning throughout break, it will also preserve any sort of creativity a student could withhold.            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+eb032ff75929,54B7666CDA35,"Hello my name is luke and im am in the Seagoing cowboys program. My friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I work two part time jobs in a grocery store. It was 1945, World War 2 ended in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.
+
+This was and opportunity for me to be drafted in the military service.
+
+I couldn't tell my friend no. So I went with him. The cattle-trip were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small -town boy.
+
+Also, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA(the United Relief and Rehabilitation). I had the side benefit of seeing
+
+Europe and China. Seeing the Acropolis in Greece.
+
+It took about to weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china.
+
+I was busy caring for the animals during the crossing. My job was to check on the animals every hour. I also found time to have fun on board. We played baseball and volleyball . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae5f1d7d34c9,54F17F5A8C3C,"Obvously the aurthor must be a fan of scientific and that's great because I am to! The aurthor feels as if, there is multiple things you can do in life and thats means if going out your comfort zone to do it then so be it. In the story and as I was reading it, he really wants to find out more about earth and its ""neighbors"", as I should say. Venus and Mars are close to earth, but venus is closer, and the reason I say that is because of size and density ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b6b5180f5b04,54F17F5A8C3C,"In the text, it says that we as humas, we have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world and the reason being is because we and he also, wanted to find out more about venus and how it works and many diffrent features ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+8e91b4cbc27f,54F17F5A8C3C,"Venus has a thick type of surface to it. It has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets. In the atmosphere of venus, there is a type of acid called ""Sulfuric Acid"" and this acid is basically the determination of the temperture for this planet. The average temperture for venus is 800 degrees Fahrenhiet, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what it would be on earth by its-self. Venus also has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system even though we have mercury closer to the sun venus is still hotter. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4e54b653e2b7,54F17F5A8C3C,The reason people and scientist are so fasinated with venus and how it works is because it was one of the closest to being more like earth and it has some features like it to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c598797e962f,54F17F5A8C3C,"This planet has more like valleys, mountains, and craters and as a author he wants to find out about more of the festure and how this will benifit him more in life if he were to continue searching about venus and earth and how they are diffrent and similar to each other ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13e1ed5a94db,54F17F5A8C3C,"By the 1800's the"" mechanical computer"" that was made for visual insight of venus and other planets around and near earth. These devices made caculations by using gears, and tool like things that hepled scientist in the 1800's up and somewhat past the 1940's. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c28db02d5c45,54F17F5A8C3C,"So in this passage, the author gave me some information about the earth, venus, mars, life, merchury, and etc. The author basically is saying at the end of the passage, that if you were to go out your comfort zone to go explore things like earth and scientific material things, that it would'nt hurt and now that I know I feel as if the author will end up exploring more about venus and that is has some good feature and bad features and the same with earth but in reality it isnt bad.              ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+19a019264c79,550102B59704,Why I think that Luke should join the program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6eb21660c0fe,550102B59704,"I think he should join the program beacause he is a good person in the story. Also I think should because he really does anything bad in the story he just things that won't get him in trouble. But also he is a good child in the story he deserves to be in that program because their is no actual reson he can't be part of that program. Also Luke does really deserve to be in that program because i don't think he has been in any other program in his life as it said in the story. But one thing that really stands out to me is that why cant he be part of that program because their really is no reason that he shouldn't be in that program.
+
+Why Luke should be part of the program. I think that Luke should be part of that program because in the story it said that Luke really wants to be in that program because he has worked his whole life to be in that program. And another one of the reasons I think that he should be in that progrsm because he has worked his whole life for to get that program and also in the story it said that Luke would not give up to get into that program and be part of the program because he thinks that he deserves to be in that program and I think that he is qualified to be on that program.
+
+why I think that Luke should be in that program. He deserves to be in that program because he their is no reason he should't be in that program. He is also a hard worker like it said in the text if I was Luke I would never give up to getting into that academy because if that was my dream I would never stop trying to get into that academy because I want to do something important in my life like join the academy Luke wants to join or be a doctor I never give up on my dreams. that why I think Luke should join that academy.                                 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e4102ba88bc,551D2A846180,so today i will be talking about my opion and how i feel about his whole little computre experssing reader and how do it will it worki and i feel that affects people ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+68cdacfaca4d,551D2A846180,hosnlty i feel like thats a bad isea because dont nobody want noody all in they bussuins iyou should let people feel how they wanna feel ,Position,Adequate,,,
+71e92f5e9772,551D2A846180,According to the packge i just read the computre is a 3d modle that tells reather you sad or happy or any other mixed emotions someone can have if you sad this ad will pop up if you make a angery face anorther will pop up to make sure they read it rigth honstly ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d27d16f8f9f6,551D2A846180,i feel like this the dunbst idea every because it seem like technolgy is just taking over the world as it all ready . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+854fdcaedd81,551D2A846180,I feel liek you should just leave people alone ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b81c963eb62,551D2A846180,"becauseif they feeling some type of way let them be stop always trying to be nosiey be and somebody bussins its not right stop trying to be caption save o let people be let them leave they life then if people find out you sad gthry going to be all up in your face like just leave people alone and let them be 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bb084b45c89e,551D2A846180,In Conclusion i think the idea is stupid ion think you should do it yall just letting tecnolgy take all the way over i feel yall shoukd just let people be if somebody want someone to they moody they will tell them maybe talking about it make them madder then what they is you never know thsts why its important to mind your bussins ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fe2daefbd461,5534E738B129,i disagree that all students should have at least one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac8b3ee29229,5534E738B129,"most of the students spend most of their time outside running, playing different sports and more they could get stressed by having to play sports each time of day and as a result the students could lose interest of playing sports. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb0242d7adf8,5534E738B129,i think that students might not need an extracurricular activity because each student has a gym class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+070b115e1cb7,5534E738B129,"in gym class each students does many different activitys including excerise, paser, sit in reach, jumping jacks and other different activitys. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60569b5137cc,5534E738B129,the students could get tired ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eaf1e15c5700,5534E738B129,causing them to not pay attention to the teacher and they could miss important information that the teacher is teaching them and that will cause the student to get a bad grade in class and fail the class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3fe6fa60beb3,5534E738B129,Finally students shouldn't have an extracurricular activity because it could make the students very stressed and tired at school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b1bc5e0e392,5534E738B129,they spend their time outside to play sports also students have gym classes where they do many different activitys. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d47123facfb1,55B4B2BFF231,In this passage I personally think that he did an good job with this artical. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e35cf13cb7da,55B4B2BFF231,He mad sure that he included everythings that he needed to put in the artical. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0b8b7e52930,55B4B2BFF231,venus is earth sister ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bfe40e3ba6ac,55B4B2BFF231,NASA going to check out other planets ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba01f4c89e0a,55B4B2BFF231,explain the planet to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0c54e71d0f6,55B4B2BFF231,Venus is the sister ouf the plantet earth because its to closes to earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+985226d47d9e,55B4B2BFF231,"What i mean to the closes is Venus could possible be another earth because it has the same features and it may well once have been the most earth - like plantet in our solar system, and in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too.
+
+Earth is closes to venus and mars but orbit the sun at different speeds means sometimes we are closer to mar and sometime venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4f3f435ea46,55B4B2BFF231,The NASA has talked about idea like sending humans to study venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16e64eef1799,55B4B2BFF231,They talk about what they going to bring and how far it is and what they are going to be doing. in the passage he talked about what happen in the war and how did it affect . and maybe having electronics up there too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b82b268e0613,55B4B2BFF231,This passage describe venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bf834bbffa00,55B4B2BFF231,he say that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanets venus. The temperature in venus could averagr over 800 degrees fahrenheit. he dec=scrive the atnospheric pressure as 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94b1660c3925,55B4B2BFF231,In this passage I learned alot that i did not know about. I personally think he did good in this passage because he made me learn and i enjoyed reading this passage . I learn about venus and learn about NASA and what they might going to do.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+92111ff91066,561798F1DC3D,"Well it's getting close to that time of year again, summer time! Warm air, bright shinning sun, and many activities that are only available during the summer season. But if you are like some students who go to certain schools maybe not so much. Some schools across the country require students to preform school based learning projects during their summer break. There projects are said to continue in helping kids and teens learn about subjects outside of school. Most of the projects are given by the teacher for the student to complete but some think that this decision should change. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7fe2c71a632f,561798F1DC3D,What many teachers don't realize is that teenagers are slowly being thrown into adulthood. Every year we have seen more and more teenagers be pushed into adult responsibility even when they are so young. Many students have to get jobs in the summer to support their families and help them. Some students work on farms which require all hands on deck. Some students even have wives and children to take care of. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c541f3d945d,561798F1DC3D,While the idea of the over the summer projects are neat they really should be student run. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+33049f90a540,561798F1DC3D,"These students want the power this time and the choice to choose what they want to do. They want to be able to pick the subject that they are interested in and pursue it, this time with nothing and no one in their way. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+45065970030000,561798F1DC3D,"Many students in the United States have been diagnosed with a learning disability. Whether is be reading, understand, or they just generally struggle to grasp a concept, these student have it hard. They are already given a disadvantage when they enter into the learning ring. Many of the students attend summer programs to assist them with their disabilities. Many teachers do not take this into account which leads to upset, angry, and stressed out students who truly can't help it. However, with them in control of these summer projects they could make something that conforms to them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69ce3093ef1f,561798F1DC3D,"The project, with them behind the learning wheel, could also assist them with their disability. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07519bad3238,561798F1DC3D,"They could make it something they understand and can learn at their own pace while also learning about something they enjoy. They can finally be set free and be given the power and choice to learn a pursuing subject, but also have something that conforms to their personal needs. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c857aac7bcef,561798F1DC3D,"Students as a word is something that a lot of people see as a word used to describe kids and teens who go to school, learn, then return to perfect homes. That might have been the case year ago, but not anymore. In today's society kids and teens are being pushed to take responsibility. They are being pushed to work and survive without guidance from parental figures. The idea of the over the summer projects is neat, but if they are truly going to work then the students should be in control. Getting a choice and a say so in the matter is what may students long for and want, because they may have never had it before. They get to choose and pursue something they may have always dreamed of and want to chase after. With nothing holding them back except their drive and imaginations, these students will finally have a choice to follow their dreams to something much bigger. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6bdb2bce8695,56193E77BB71,"Every living thing on planet earth has emotions. These emotions have been used since the beginning of time to express the feelings of the people around you. However, these emotions can be decieving. Someone could say they are happy, when really they are angry or upset. This is where the Facial Action Coding System comes into play. The FACS is a software that detects human emotion by tracking muscles in the face. For example, when you are happy, muscles in your face move up, and when you are sad, they move down, FACS tracks this and calculates your emotions. The creators of this software, Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe are the leading experts of developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. There are still some questions surrounding the usefulness of FACS, like what could this software actually be used for? One of the ways FACS may be used is in classrooms. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bf3306908bc9,56193E77BB71,"It may sound far fetched, but actually, FACS may be the best thing to come to schools ",Position,Effective,,,
+163b86285c57,56193E77BB71,flexible learning ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1ad1a117e4d8,56193E77BB71,the ability to read the students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8a409375a2fc,56193E77BB71,"In the education world, teachers are the backbone of the infestructure. Without teachers, the whole system would collapse. However, it may be hard for one teacher to connect with every student individually and make sure they are learning properly or if they are paying attention. This is where FACS comes in. In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"", Dr. Huang talks about FACS in classrooms more in depth, ""'A classroom computer could recgonize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human istructor.'"" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f98a8c2d547,56193E77BB71,"With FACS, every child could essentially have a customized lesson plan exactly for their needs. This would make children more eager to learn because they begin to enjoy it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5.02918097E+066,56193E77BB71,"Besides the classroom, FACS could also be used in the school elsewhere. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ac600d4c6fe,56193E77BB71,"One of the other important areas this could be used is in counceling. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94c27bb04232,56193E77BB71,It is very hard for anyone to tell someone they are sad. This is especally true when they barely know the person they are talking to. This can be the case for school councelors and the children they are meeting with. FACS may be able to help. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe962fb2be21,56193E77BB71,"With FACS, the school could see if children are upset or scared. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0e18a9088782,56193E77BB71,"The school could also see how often these children feel this way. When a child is unhappy or scared, it is very unlikely that they are going to be doing their work at full capacity. If FACS could find these children that need help, they could be helped faster. This could also be used to find children being bullied. If the child is feeling scared around another student, or if a child is afraid of a classroom, they could be helped because FACS was able to read them. FACS may even be able to detect if a child is afraid of leaving school. With FACS, it's like every child in school has someone that is looking out for them, even if no one else is ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b87b3fa925dd,56193E77BB71,"It may be true that some children might not want people to know about this, that they may want to hide it. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3c7ed500d7ee,56193E77BB71,"However, it is never healthy to hide such strong emotions, especally if there are people around you willing to help. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c1d5e682987c,56193E77BB71,"With the constant evoultion of the way we learn, its not suprising that something like FACS was created. Emotions have been with everything living since the beginning of time. Before FACS, it was suprisingly difficult to read these emotions in people. Such a crucial part of our everyday lives could be easily hidden away by a fake smile or a theatre tear. But now that there is FACS helping out, looks are no longer decieving. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+28049e905d03,565B5C8E9B05,"This story is about evaluating The Challenge of Exploring Venus. In the first paragraph it is kinda misleading because it says that venus sometimes called the evening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then it goes on to talk about how venus is also a planet so the name is very misleading. Then paragraph two it talks about how its a planet again not a star and its saying that its the closest planet to earth. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5b0ff087dc00,565B5C8E9B05,Venus is the closest planet to earth and yet to there has been a spacecraft to survive the landing. Although it could be a little bit tough seems haw venus's atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus surface the temperatues average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. With that kind of heat and pressure could even crush a submarine. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56de9c2703e2,565B5C8E9B05,In conclusion the story had some great details about what venus was like compared to earth but i also think that it was a little misleading about star planet and i think that could have been fixed up so it didnt have you on your toes trying to find out wether or not it was a star or a planet that was earths twin. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fbb2ffc9998d,567D7BBCEF48,"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and accasionally the closest in distance too. the speed between Mars, Venus, and Earth orbit the sun in different speeds. these difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times venus
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmophere. on the planet's surface, tempers average over 800 degrees ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d7d2a5bce04,567D7BBCEF48,this showws how dangerous it s trying to study venus specially with the high percentages that this story has about venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ab1c1541d1fa,567D7BBCEF48,"Paragraph 4 the authour asks "" if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visit to its surface?"" he states that astronomers are fasinated by planet in our solor system , long ago, Venus was probably covered large;y with oceans and could have supported varous forms of life, just like earth. Today,
+
+Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b2f2ae1d93f4,56C208138AC9,I think people should join the program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+096aa4210a63,56C208138AC9,that way they or we can help people or other countries in need of help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58f7aa72dae1,56C208138AC9,"If other countries need help or something like water or food or something like that like maybe more homes to build for the homeless.
+
+Another good thing about it is that you can travel around the world and the states like if there are more animals do in need because they are in danger and almost extinct!
+
+The best part is that you go out around the world and help out everything and if you are in the news for that and the people see that you were on the news with all of you friends then they might as well congratulat you. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1403da5c2ff3,56C6D97AF40B,"Hi, I'm Luke Bomberger. I was a Seagoing Cowboy. You might be pondering what that is, and if you are, I will inform you. Seagoing Cowboys help animals, mostly horses, donkeys, cows, and mules, that are being shipped overseas to avoid harm get to their destination. Are you thinking that you maight like being part of this program? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a8d754a056fa,56C6D97AF40B,you can help animals that are in danger and get to know them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6319a5bed0d3,56C6D97AF40B,"This gives you a good feeling of helpfulness and compassion. I love to save lives, especially if they're animals'. I also liked to be freinds with them. Even though there are many other people on the boat with you, the creatures all have their own personalities, and this makes them fun to hang out with. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d068e2c646e8,56C6D97AF40B,you get to see the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f032a3e75da,56C6D97AF40B,"I have seen the Acropolis in Greece, the Panama Canal, and an excavated castle in Crete. I have been to Europe, China, and Italy. You can go to all of these places, see these sights, and more if you join their program. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d1159378b384,56C6D97AF40B,there are so many people on the boat with you that it is impossible not to make a friend and have fun almost every day ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6e7892bfd80,56C6D97AF40B,"I have made ample new companions. There are also many games played on the ship. They include baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, reading, boxing, and whittling. As you can probably tell, these are all exciting to do with your buddies. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d5fc09b6746,56C6D97AF40B,"Although there are a few risks, such as stormy weather, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ee39a6f12f67,56C6D97AF40B,t is worth it to see the animals get safely to their destination. You can join knowing that you will be making big differences in millions of creatures' lives. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4c2eabf2f146,56C6D97AF40B,"If you want to have an amazing time with friends, play enjoyable games, see awesome landmarks and buildings, and help and make friends with animals ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+61e554f11dd1,56C6D97AF40B,you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1a3ec4398995,57076BE40C47,limiting car usage can have many advantages ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a61fe96c6e4a,57076BE40C47,"a big topic would be because of the gas getting in the air creating ""smog"" or pollution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ad35505255a,57076BE40C47,Keeping the earth clean but banning cars can make the enviornment a better place. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b02ab4a14be,57076BE40C47,limiting the use of cars can be very good for our enviornment because it would make the air less polluted ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00a0b8dd5e61,57076BE40C47,"As stated in source 2 paragraph 5,""congestion was down 60 percent in the capitol of France, after five days of intensifying smog..."" thats a big percent and with that we are making the earth green. France even tried to ban cars even and odd to reduce the pollution as being talked about in paragraph 2 and 3. They were being fined if they drove, that is atleast until the air cleared up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bcc4115240fb,57076BE40C47,"On the other hand, banning cars or not driving is a silly decision. It may be good for our earth and our health, but if you need to leave three hours before hand to reach your destination on time, then you need to buckle up and step on the gas. If gas so so bad for the enviornment, then why dont we ban gas cars? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fcd414de4ed3,57076BE40C47,There are many indrustries and or companys that have created electronic cars. Charging our cars many be difficlut for long road trips but there could be a slot for gas for when our battery level is running low we can get some gas to reach a destination and charge it. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+96667d44849a,57076BE40C47,"Having fellow citizens limiting car usage can have many advantages, but also a few disadvanteages. Cars can clean up the air but also make us gasp for it. Having a car should be a choice we get to make. Having events and days where ""no cars can be driven or you get a fine"" is not needed in anybodys lives. What decision would you decide, having a car, or joining in on being green?  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ffb512aac4d1,5716C4DAFC9E,"""SLAM!"" Generic_Name throws the door back behind her. Generic_Name's mother flies down the stairs so fast, she nearly face plants into the wall ahead. ""What's the matter honey?"" ""Ughh! My new principal just announced that all students are now required to participate in an extracurricular activity everyday after school, and i don't have any interest in that!"" Generic_Name shrieks.""Well why is that such a bad thing?"" her mom says calmly.""That's the point! i don't want to waste my time after school on something stupid like that. I would rather be relaxing by myself after all of my homework,"" Generic_Name answers irritably. ""Come on, you could make new friends, and might surprise yourself with new interests.""I think it would be really good for you,"" her mom explains. ""Well I disagree,"" Generic_Name responds. ""Please would you give it a try? I see opportunity for you here. I really do,"" Her mom pushes. ""I don't need more people or friends in my life. Besides, none of the activities offered sound appealing to me at all,"" Generic_Name says. "" How about cross country? You know your dad and i used to do it when we were younger, and when you were little you always talked about how you wanted to be a runner like me when you got older. Just try it, and if you really don't like it, i'll go talk to your principal about the requirement,"" her mom offers. ""I don't know,"" Generic_Name contemplates. ""Think about all of the great opportunities and things that could come out of this!"" Generic_Name's mom says positively. ""Please?"" her mom tries one last time. Generic_Name sighs. ""I guess,"" she finally agrees. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7ba28a042da9,5716C4DAFC9E,"Forced extracurricular activities will benefit students in many ways, especially by motivating ones that do not typically do activities ",Position,Effective,,,
+4f4af5ebbeff,5716C4DAFC9E,"Our school should continue to require students to participate in extracurricular activities because it provides balance in their schedules, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a58ecd8dc63,5716C4DAFC9E,helps them to build new friendships ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9cae5781665f,5716C4DAFC9E,"and gives them the opportunity to try new things. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffd5a723f367,5716C4DAFC9E,The first reason our school should continue to require extracurricular activities is because it provides balance in students' schedules ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ca5d6ac516c,5716C4DAFC9E,"Balance is one thing that is very important, especially when it comes to middle and high school; colleges look at whether a student can manage an activity with all of the school work as a big factor in the admissions process. For example, My older sister applied to UVA last year; She had straight A's, a great GPA and SAT score, but got denied because she wasn't a balanced student. She claims that if she would have had a required extracurricular activity, she would have had a better high school experience because it would force her to have a little more fun, which she needed at the time.
+
+Another example of the lack of balance is that my older brother comes home stressed and angry everyday because he's so determined about keeping his grades up in high school. His favorite sport used to be football, until his classes started getting harder and he stopped playing. However, next year he is going to step down from one of his hard classes, so he can play football again and still keep his grades up; therefore, he will regain his much needed balance again. If our school continues to require these extracurricular activities, it will prepare students for high school by showing them that they need to have a balanced school-work life to both mentally and physically succeed. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc33113a1dce,5716C4DAFC9E,The next reason our school should continue to require extracurricular activities is because it helps students build new friendships. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4f0aa8c22a9a,5716C4DAFC9E,"It is very important to have good friends throughout middle school and high school because you will need people to talk to about things, support you in situations. and even just to share laughter and spend time with that aren't your family. For example, when i started middle school my parents made me try out for track, which i really didn't want to do. After a few days, i had made so many great friends that i could not only hang out with at practice, but i also then knew them at school. To this day, i am even better friends with those people, therefore, i can't imagine what my life would be like if i hadn't tried out for track. Another example is my older brother made his closest friends, Generic_Name and Generic_Name, in football when he first started high school. Before that, he didn't have many good friends; football really changed his life in that way, for i never see him happier than when he is with them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e775bfaead07,5716C4DAFC9E,The final reason our school should continue to require extracurricular activities is because it gives students the opportunity to try new things. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+790a5f0c4ba8,5716C4DAFC9E,"If you aren't required to do something, most of the time you probably won't do it unless it interests you; however if you are required to do something, you will be forced to do it no matter what, but you might surprise yourself, and find interest in that thing after all. Like mentioned previously, my parents made me try out for track when i first started middle school. At first, i wasn't the biggest fan of the idea, but i decided to give it a try; i ended up surprising myself, and Absolutely loved it. I was one of the best sprinters on my team, and found running to be a great way to release my negative energy from the day. Another example of this is my friend Generic_Name; she had no interest in sewing at all, but her mom forced her to try the sewing club at her school. Vivian ended up really enjoying it, and found it very therapeutic, as it was a great way to let out her stresses from the school day. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+21c68e7dac3a,5716C4DAFC9E,"By continuing to extracurricular activities, schools will positively benefit students by providing balance in their schedules, building new friendships, and giving them the opportunity to try new things. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+db5d52a99c3b,572236CAAFCE,"Why do nothing, when you can do something that will help you no and in your future? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+19efa470ad4a,572236CAAFCE,"Students should be required to do at least one extracurricular activity. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+aa963b93991e,572236CAAFCE,"students will get to connect with others who have their same interests, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+83d2474bf069,572236CAAFCE,"Students get to meet kids that they normally wouldn't meet just in school, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+19a796730d13,572236CAAFCE,students will get an example on what it is like to work with a team or group. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4001aeb7fe5c,572236CAAFCE,it is good for students to participate in one extracurricular activity because students will get to connect with others who have their same interests. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+844f63fb6295,572236CAAFCE,"People that have your same interests are different than people that you hang out in school.
+
+You hang out with people in school because they have the personality that you enjoy to hang out with.
+
+But, people with the your interests will understand you better and you will always have something to talk about.
+
+The people in your group will talk about the same things that you do.
+
+For example, a student wants to join the soccer team, and he doesn't know anyone.
+
+The student can is always able to talk to his teammates about soccer because they are on the same team.
+
+Then eventually, the student will no longer have to only talk about soccer because he has finally fit in to the rest of the kids.
+
+Finally, the kids that have the same interests as you will also be the people that you will talk to the most in or outside of school because you like to talk to them about your sport or group. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+73cbc0153e7f,572236CAAFCE,", it would be good for students to do an extracurricular activity because they will get to meet people that they normally wouldn't meet when you are in school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fafecf37a8b4,572236CAAFCE,"Joining a team or group will be nerve racking at first because you might not know anyone that share the same interests as you do.
+
+But when the team/group finally gets to talking, they will have bonded so that nobody could break them apart.
+
+It is important to get those types of relationships because if you ever need help to do something, then your team/group will have your back no matter what the problem is.
+
+In school, you choose who your friends are, and once you have your group, nobody else is allowed in.
+
+But when you join one a sports team, the student council, or the yearbook staff, then you set aside your school friends and you allow yourself to gain different friends.
+
+People that you once thought were ""weird"", or ""annoying,"" are now your friends because you realized that they actually have the same personality that you do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1c0facd20ca7,572236CAAFCE,it is important to do at least one extracurricular activity because students will get a taste of the real world in having to work as a team to get things done. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+80f0fd61e7e3,572236CAAFCE,"If students don't get the opportunity to work with a group, and to work as a team, then they wouldn't be prepared for life when they are older.
+
+Learning to work with people is one of the most important things you need to know how to do.
+
+So the sooner that you start, the better the future that you will have.
+
+If you don't know how to work with people, then the path that is in front of you is rough because nobody will want to hire you, nobody will want to work with you, and nobody will have sympathy for you.
+
+Nobody will hire you because they will look at your back round and see nothing in you that will help them in their work space.
+
+Nobody will want to work with you because you will be mean and do little to no work.
+
+Finally, nobody will have sympathy for you because they know that you had every chance to be successful, but you chose not to be.
+
+Most people don't want that, do you? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+deb2c99cd1d0,572236CAAFCE,"it would be smart for the principle to implement that students have to participate in at least one extracurricular activity because students will get to connect with others that have their same interests, students will get to meet other students that they wouldn't normally meet in normal school time, and the students will get an example on what it is like to work as a team and to prosper at doing your work.
+
+Starting with an extracurricular activity now will not only help you now, but it will help you later in life too.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aada5ad6f81b,57280EFE34F4,I am doing a essay about technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+25e804a84a21,57280EFE34F4,I dont think technology can tell someone in emotes by scanning their face. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3053a814857f,57280EFE34F4,It cant go thou are mind and say they are feeling sad ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5eada11f4288,57280EFE34F4,"Us humans can tell if they are sad or happy because we have been thou the same things they are going thou. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1183b6981ca2,57280EFE34F4,If it is true I would not use because if they are using it as a govement weapon to find if some one is hinding some well needed things and they start to used this and if it gives them wrong information that person might be in some trouble ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+057d58ad3491,57280EFE34F4,And the other way around if they have some need information and the FACS or Facial Action Coding System just lost it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+14a474264896,57280EFE34F4,If it can do this. This thing will be ahead in technology and clear a path for us in the near furture ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5507d52b4449,57280EFE34F4,But I dont blieve this computer can tell people feelings. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a627dbac2c72,57280EFE34F4,"First how big is it? Is it the size of a gym or is it as small as a Iphone 4? This computer is just a big fake. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+53a941c2c6e1,57280EFE34F4,"Second how much does it cost? Is it the same to build it as much as a lamborigini or as much as a pencil? Third, how long does it take to build it. And how long does it last for. 1 minites or 3 hours. How long does it scan for. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce070588fc64,57596DF3AD20,"Have you ever wondered how someone close to you was feeling, at any moment of the day? This new Facial Action Coding System can help you do exactly that. The system will be useful in many ways, but I think it can be very useful in the everyday classroom. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+924aa1de04d7,57596DF3AD20,"Teachers have always wondered how their students were feeling at all times during their lesson, and this software can help them reach out to their students tremendously ",Position,Effective,,,
+0e9ef2275d50,57596DF3AD20,It can help with their lesson plan ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2dfb13444fa3,57596DF3AD20,their attitude ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0104e273089a,57596DF3AD20,their teaching style ,Claim,Effective,,,
+717229b24192,57596DF3AD20,Teachers make a lesson plan for the week and it can change depending on the circumstances. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f99cb876884d,57596DF3AD20,"Imagine being a teacher and being able to read the students' faces an emotions. In paragraph 6, it states that ""the software can recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused."" This can allow teachers to analyze the situation in which the classroom is in. If the students are generally happy, then you can go along teaching and educating them the same way as you did before. Now, what if the students were not so enthused about your lectures? If the students show a monotone facial expression, or maybe a bored and sad one, then it might be due time to go and fix your mistakes, make the plan more exciting, and get them excited about learning. This can improve their confidence and allow them to have a bright future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e93ff4f87de3,57596DF3AD20,"The way students act in class often create a chain reaction, making the teachers either pleased or digruntled with the way the students behave. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3c4099bc247,57596DF3AD20,"If the teachers can read their expressions, change their lesson plan, and create a greatly improved learning environment, then everyone can go home happy. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+28b0261c926c,57596DF3AD20,"The students will listen more intently and the teachers will not have such a hard time dealing with their attitudes. In this scenario, everyone can get along well together and enjoy their time in the classroom. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25c747002b90,57596DF3AD20,"In paragraph 3, it states that the software can ""classify six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness."" Picking up these emotions on a student can change the way a learning environment works. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4991e6733dd3,57596DF3AD20,"If the student is showing signs of negative facial expressions and emotions, then the teacher can alter their style of teaching. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a31fb18d9920,57596DF3AD20,"They can create a warm and fun learning environment for the pupils, which can lead to them successfully gaining the knowledge they need to move on in life. The way a student acts in the classroom can affect many others around them and their attitude towards learning. If a teacher can detect even the slightest bit of negativity in the classroom, they can stop the spread and do their best to make learning fun and relatable for the students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9fb518f68c17,57596DF3AD20,"This new software could be innovative for the way classrooms work in the future. If students could be educated the way they would want to be educated, yet still get the knowledge they need to succeed, then the future generation could be unstoppable. In paragraph 9 it states that ""making faces can reveal so much about the science of emotions."" There are no limits to what the next generation can do if it all starts with teachers being able to read the emotions of their students. The future starts here with this idea, and this software. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+828f38d9fc56,575C00FBC60A,The passage talks about all the positive and negative things that would make Venus be good to study because of some of theories of it being Earth like ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+680d5d45140c,575C00FBC60A,"The study of life on Venus would have many hard obstacles to overcome and look deeper into. "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+254a3ebfb18b,575C00FBC60A,A thick layer of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95a285987ffc,575C00FBC60A,"That would be the biggest problem to try and fix because humans who take in too much Carbon Dioxide could potentially die. ""These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth."" That whole sentence by it self sums up how much of a complication it would be to study Venus ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e31d00b6060,575C00FBC60A,Astronomers are fascinated by venus that they want to know if it was once a earth like plant long before ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44c873f71d3e,575C00FBC60A,"Everytime there are some good positives about the study of Venus there's always something negative following it. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has a compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray."" This a positive input to how to discover some kind of basic of life. "" However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only a limited insight on the ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective."" This is a barrier in research not being able to get full anwers is going to be hard to discover life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a913e63aa3f2,575C00FBC60A,The study of Venus would make the scientist have to think harder and make more advance technology but they can do that until they get full answers on what they might come up on.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+72c75cd44c62,57691ED21F01,Everyone remembers mars the planet that Nasa was trying to get on to see if it's possible to live on? Well now they changed into a diffrent planet called Venus. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d61d37a54eb4,57691ED21F01,"The author of the article ""The challenge of exploring Venus"" is stating his choice on what Nasa is doing. He is making it very clear that he wants people to explore Venus. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+16b99a56ea92,57691ED21F01,"He gave a hint in one part of his story. For example he says ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has valuse, not only becuase og insite to be gained on the planet its self."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+536e84fcc404,57691ED21F01,He's is giving his full suport on Nasa's choice to go and study Venus. He also is saying to keep trying even though it is dangerous. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d791336bd565,57691ED21F01,"In the text it says that ""A thick atmoshpere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc0d42731410,57691ED21F01,This Is saying that its very dangerousover there on Venus and the pressure could destroy everything there. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c239ef4544c5,57691ED21F01,In Conclusion he gives his full support no matter what. He is hoping that they keep striving to find a way to successsfuly accomplish whatever they need to do. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4b3e424b7794,57778A40CC36,i tthink we shouldnt be able to have technology read are emotions if we dont want it to. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+31f33673c442,57778A40CC36,in the artical its does a 3-d computer model of your face. and they didnt get all the emotions that everyone might have ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a97037fa36c5,57778A40CC36,like some people have deprrison and some might have the feeking of blah but you guys wouldnt know because you dont have that as a oppsion on there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1ba4ad248a0,57778A40CC36,they talk about how a home pc cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode someone simle. i think that should make it where no matter what you use it on it can run it. with out having to write it down ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+309df4d93e16,57778A40CC36,what if someone is fake smiling. is your technology going to be able to tell if your really happy or not? I think it not a good idea because one it doesnt tell you all the emotions that the person is feeling and what if the person doesnt want one or doesnt like it and they aloud ti get rid of it or do they have to keep it. I know i wouldnt want someone else to tell me my emotions so i surely dont want some technology telling me how i feel . ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a6dca16bc09f,578C014A7BBE,"Venus is the second planet it also is the hottest planet which is never be touched i a spaceship since 3 decades. It is sometimes called ""Evening Star' becuase it is one on the brightest points of the light in the sky. It was often told that the planet Venus was the twin of Earth because they have the same size, they often send numerous of spaceships to Venus to see if it would work out because when they would send some it would always burn through. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bef7b22ade45,578C014A7BBE,"Venus is a thick atmosphere of almost 90% of carbon dioxide in Venus. NASA's is doing investigations on how they can gp put some spaceships on the planet without buring down, so they are using high technlogy to go check the hot planet Venus. Scientist are working on approaching to study on Venus so they can be able to let people know more information about it. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3df0e93a9e4,578C014A7BBE,"Finally. Venus is a planet close to the sun, its even the hottest planet ever. Nobody wants to go to Venus because its hot and you can die by going into Venus and knowing that scientists don't want to go put a foot on the planet because they're scared they going to die or anything bad is going to happened. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+15ad7cdc75ba,57CE6ED06513,"In this article the author is telling us that facts about Venus how it's called the ""Evening star"" because it's the ""brightest points of the light in the sky night"" and it is a good place to examine, because of how close it is to the sun and earth, of its tempature, its heat, pressure, and how no spacecraft have landed there. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+33a6bd79724d,57CE6ED06513,"But it's really dangerous in Venus. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a19104195fe4,57CE6ED06513,"It's dangerous in because, a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent cardon dioxide blankets venus, their is also clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere, on the plants surface temperatures avaerage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then whats in our earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37f490dc3351,57CE6ED06513,And If they were to explore venus NASA would need scientist to survive the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6cf18754919,57CE6ED06513,They would need to make blimp-car like vehicles they need to hover for miles and miles becuase it's is 170 degrees fahrenheit which means they would burn real bad. and the lights need to be real good because they need to penetrate the dense of the atmosphere. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb7bcbb02b7a,57CE6ED06513,I think they shouldn't explore Venus because it's a suicide mission it's too hot a lot of co2 and temperatures reach over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a4be4607b65e,57E1C649E187,"The author has said that NASA has three pictures from the red planet. In the pictures is a face, from three different years (1976, 1998, 2001). The last picture has a clear image of the face. It has a cracked eye and to the left side. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b7f9bc70d727,57E1C649E187,This is a rock that had just been formed like this. It had been forming to look like this for years. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f534784811f,57E1C649E187,If it had not been discovered what would we think about the red planet. The planet would just be another planet close to earth. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cadab14267c4,57E1C649E187,"If we could get a human on the red planet that would be great. We can't do that yet. It will not happen for another 400 to 500 years. This is a long wait time, but in the end it is all going to be worth every hour put in.
+
+The red planet has many mysteres we will never know. This one will be around for years to come. The next generation will find out if life is out there. If they find it make contact. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+661fa0642db2,57E6768B4C73,Limiting car usage is something that we all need to do. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b320c43414de,57E6768B4C73,There are numerous ways of doing this, a person can car-pool or use other means of transportation ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+1baac1e34ce9,57E6768B4C73,"Today my sister and I created a mess of emissions just getting to school to take this test that is completely worthless. I do not gain from this test, nor do my proctors who have to dilligently coach a hundrded students through a bogus set of instructions for this bogus test ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5383be510042,57E6768B4C73,Those emmissions are still rising. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+676a1896120b,57E6768B4C73,"For each one person in the room where i'm taking this worthless test, hundreds of cubic feet in carbon monoxide gas have been released into the atmosphere. When this test is over it will be sent to some place, probably in the northern part of Florida for a bunch of people to grade. Test by test. They too must create huge emmissions to get to the place where they grade this test. Or do they? We have no idea who created this test, why we're taking it, or even the slightest insight of who's grading it or if it will even be graded! We're like a bunch of helpless test animals deprived of sleep because we have to write some bogus test. I look around me in this room and there is at least 40 people who I can see are pouring their hearts out on this test. I did yesterday, and for what? I cant be proud about this essay I just wrote, or even share it with my family, there is hardly even a record I took this darn thing. They tell us that we're setting the bar high for other schools but for what reason. Why would you strive to be better than someone who has writen their sole out on this essay. Its supposed to be special with origionality! These are supposed grades that you ace because you wrote a beautiful essay you cherished, and took pride in and even brought in other authors to make your work stronger, then you hear that that essay you submitted was to set the bar high for people we've never met. What kind of sick mind creates prompts for sudents to devote themselves to school and greatness and makes them take this whole thing just to see how it went? Why dont you make this thing worth a goal? Give us an incentive! It's so rediculous that I have to sit here and write about car emissions when I dont drive. You should turn this around on yourslef and ask why you did it. Why the hell do you need to test us on the daily basis like this. This test is an outrage and a discrase that should not even be thought about. I have better stuff to do. I want to learn about the things essential to me, not some foney worthless writing essay about car emmissions in France. This whole thing is so irrelevent to me it's sick. For me to use up energy and valuable time is something like this is not in charactar for me. And to think I have to sit here for another hour and thirty minutes. I feel sorry that my school and I have to put up with this crap. This test was a giant waste of time, you dont deserve my response and screw you for putting me and 500 other people through this. Before you even try to do this again ask yourself if what you're doing is right, if it's worth other peoples while. I want someone who made this test happen to read my little rant to see how students really feel. I know I speak for many of my peers with this writting. If you're just reading this and have nothing to do with me receiving this test, no hard feelings. Have a great day and thanks for taking your valuable time to read this. I hope its more compeling then reading about car emissions. :^)   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c8fbf4af3c55,57ED566E615C,Ever been rushed around? Have had so much to do in so little time? What if you had to do a extra activity on top of that? Would your life be hectic? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+13021dd1f780,57ED566E615C,I disagree with making kids do extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+60afc27cfc34,57ED566E615C,time is something that passes all the time ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ced55961acb1,57ED566E615C,Not all of the students can get a ride ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+329c22ed2bfd,57ED566E615C,adding this will cause the student to become more stressed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e50e655aed1,57ED566E615C,"Time. 24 hours a day. Students spend seven through 8 hours a day at school. Should be getting at least eight hours of sleep. This is leaving on eights hours to do homework, chores, ride or walk home, and spend time with family. If you add an extra activity this will take away from time at home. Some of the activities are fished late at night or are held in a place far away so it will take awhile to get home. This makes doing homework hard or even sleeping hard. If a student comes to school sleep it will make the work that they are doing decrease. When this happens the grades will drop slowly but surely. When they see that there grade has dropped this makes them upset and stressed. Creating this viscous cycle ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+922e997fd143,57ED566E615C,Forcing kids to do after and during school activities will make free time vanish into thin air. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b9c56b1d0f2e,57ED566E615C,buses are the way students get to and from school. People who live far and close can take a bus. Even walk. If someone stays after school there is no bus to take them home. The either have to walk or find a ride. Some parents are busy or can't pick them up. What do you do about this? Giving a bus to take one or two kids home wouldn't make sense. If you do this option it will take awhile to find someone to do it or to find out if the kid has permeation from the parents. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+126c9acd5fe9,57ED566E615C,If you give students the choice to do things after school they can figure out if they need a ride or if they do not need a ride. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+db5a1f40e450,57ED566E615C,"Sols, testing, homework, grades, home life, drama, and family. All of these things are stressful. Life moves by so mast. Stress comes in and out of our lives all of the time. That is normal for humans. Even if we don't have stress in our lives homework and testing can just make you stressed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b47177ad9e0,57ED566E615C,"Making kids do extra activities will make students have less time for home, not all kids can get a ride home from school, doing this will ad more stress. Do you have enough time?              ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ee6a5095c6d4,584A4BB1E954,I think students should designed. students can do this well. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c4fad2913651,584A4BB1E954,they can choose their projects. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+85fee8d02fc4,584A4BB1E954,"For example, some students need an essay project but teachers give harder projects for students and they can't do this projects. And some students not have idea about the projects from teachers but when students choose their projects they have good ideas about their projects. However, some teachers did not like to students choose their projects . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+49699a5817d8,584A4BB1E954,Some may argue summer projects from teachers is good. This is because the teachers have more information about summer projects and they know what kind of projects is better for students. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+125ee3c62b1e,584A4BB1E954,"However, some students not have information about summer projects and they did not like to complete the summer projects from teachers in the summer. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9c75f761730b,584A4BB1E954,I think the students need to choose their projects because if they choose their projects they like the summer projects and they really want to complete their projects in the summer vacation and they have good ideas about the projects. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dc06a4435801,5875D6BFC687,"all 44 major muscal in the model must move like a human muscles, six basic emotion happiness,surpris, anger disgust ,fear and sadness,even though indivduals often sshow varying degrees of expression like not smiliing as broadly.
+
+in real face or in the panted face of mona lisa. by weighting the different units the oftware can even identify mixed emotions, most of us would have troble actually decribing each facial trait the conveys happy,worried.
+
+the mona Lisa demonstration is relly intended to bring a smile to your face ,whike it just how this computer can do, putting on a happy face actually work,you can tell probably how a friend is feeling simply by the book on her face. the the mona lisa demonstration is really intendedvto bring a smile to her face, a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becomeing confused or bored. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+211b021a2b76,5875D6BFC687,based on when i have reand and uner stand peopel share not be jubget on thr facial expressins ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d19b91c9989e,5875D6BFC687,just like stying don't judge a book by it's every for instance in the story it sfgs imangine a computer that knoa when your happy or sad . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4448cd6f47b4,5875D6BFC687,that would be unseen for there to be a computer of any such to even exist. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f13e31f96e8a,5875D6BFC687,the other thing is why would there be anything that has to reand a persont feelings ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19987ceccf5e,5875D6BFC687,thats not the why it should be in some case we all assunc some time how he person is feelings every are has there won why of showing that emotins in different waya. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3aeadaeefb28,5875D6BFC687,in same away lets say there was a camputer or anything that can read mines how would that computer express the feeling in what way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6eeba1a2bbd,5875D6BFC687,"would the computer there isn't anything of that matter peopel have mixet anything a minute there happy and the minute going through sometime.
+
+most of the time in a classroom kids go through staff at have ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6d704a24386e,5875D6BFC687,so basically saying that a simple computer would help a think that would't be amanzing.            ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+78f8515e5597,58B7F73691D2,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" technology is used to read the emotional expressions of people called the Facial Action Coding System ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a302c73969e7,58B7F73691D2,I think that it is a very useful thing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e9c9338b549,58B7F73691D2,with this you have so many advantages like being able to tell if a student likes a lesson or is bored with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90ac30cef080,58B7F73691D2,When using Facial Action Coding System their are many good reasons to use it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e163e32c874,58B7F73691D2,"for example paragraph 6 says ""if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similiar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next add will be different. also classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, and could modify the lesson for the student. FACS works by whatching 44 major muscles in your face to see how they move to determine your expression. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3abdf1c09e3c,58B7F73691D2,Although this is a great tool to use when trying to teach students it is probably very expensive to have it installed into computers for students nationwide ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+de49797a6579,58B7F73691D2,Also some poeple may not like the fact that they are a computer is able to read their emotions and may reject this tool. For some students it may not even help them and would rather talk to a teacher for help rather than use a computer. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+305dfc2ee236,58B7F73691D2,Even though there are some down sides to using Facial Action Coding System ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0c47f09c3217,58B7F73691D2,it is still a very good tool to use in the classroom or anywhere needed ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0b3be464bdb2,58B7F73691D2,"FACS can classify six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness just by seeing the the movements of your facial muscles. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+57dd72f3f078,58B7F73691D2,I think that using this tool is a great way to improve several things and by looking at my examples I have shown that using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is a very valuable tool. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e13e23961c8,58D4330D6F28,"Imagine yourself as a teacher and one of your students clearly skipped your class yesterday and is lying about where they were yesterday, and all you see is a smirk, well what if you could teel if they were lying by a device that could read their facial expression ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+26b3f2255b17,58D4330D6F28,"Well i think it can and should be brought to teachers and schools to really crack doown on well, reckless teenagers. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7b049d9cc08e,58D4330D6F28,"In paragraph three the passage states, ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit."" Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bd0e51649a03,58D4330D6F28,"What this can prove is that the process of expression recognization requires no harm to the face or person and is created by the studies of not only technological professionals, but also psychological preoffesionals as well. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b5daa10f6f28,58D4330D6F28,"To conclude, it would be a whole lot nicer if teachers and all educators knew what students were really thinking when being taught. And what would be neat is if students also new the real expression teachers made and what they really felt about the students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0589f66af736,58ED581D8B93,"A classroom is possibly one of the most diverse places we can have in today's world. There are students with different ethnic backgrounds, different spoken languages, and different emotions. Regardless, all students gather to learn new material used to help them in the real world. However, certain material presents hardship with some students and ease with other. Being able to understand exactly how a student feels can make their learning significantly easier. Though some problems may occur, it can be invaluable to a student ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2f897e1c63ef,58ED581D8B93,"The FACS technology can be utilized in the classroom in may ways with few downfalls. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+a49cf2718fec,58ED581D8B93,"In the world like the one today, reliability and consistently are key. People today enjoy things that are useful and fun. The children of this generation especially want that. Before the children can age and make something with their lives, someone along the road has to teach them ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3fa0f9d0a0c6,58ED581D8B93,Education is something that starts young and is so important and valued so heavily that without it you are looked at as irrelevant. States hire teachers and put trust in them that they are able to teach the children and provide a good base to go out and experience the real world. Teachers have so much weight bearing down on them. A teaching job is argueably one of the most mentally exhausting and frustrating. Some students do not care about grades while some graduate with a 3.8gpa ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d596f45e3331,58ED581D8B93,Imagine how different this world could be if everyone was able to graduate with a high gpa and go to college and proceed to make their lives meaningful. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bcb09a3d9b3,58ED581D8B93,"Thomas Huang, of Beckman Institue for Advanced Science at the University of Illonois was one such person. Along side Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam, Huang may have created one technology that can be the change. These scientists create the FACS, or Facial Action Coding System. The computer is used to read human facial motion and determine emotions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+896f6f2872ad,58ED581D8B93,Prof. Huang even has gone on record to say that it can be beneficial in a classroom. This statement is true beyond a doubt. Students emotion's change from minute to minute. There are unlimited benfits with only a few cons ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+778d7fa039f6,58ED581D8B93,"The main con is that the machine may take time to read a face and by the time it has been read, the emotion can change. Also, this technology can be expensive, especially for a school with hundreds or even thousands of students ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6ff5054e8ad3,58ED581D8B93,"Despite that, the machine can understand students that day. With a better understanding for the student, the lesson can be adjusted to make it more comprehensable ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+384169b9a11f,58ED581D8B93,"Since most classrooms are not this dynamic, every student moves on to doing the same thing at the same time. This technology can change up the questions so that an advanced student may move on faster than one who is struggling. Perhaps one of the most important things people need to be aware of in the education system is the student's emotion. Like stated previously, emotions change. So if the computers sees a student with health issues such as depression, it can aid the student in getting help. Parents, teachers, and other school administration need to be aware of the student more than the cost of things. Even with the cost the computer's benefits are easily overshadowing it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a70f713ead2,58ED581D8B93,"Teachers and students rely on technology so often and for so many reasons. Whether it be school work or just for entertainment, there is no harm to add a feature that reads emotion. The price should be looked at as just a number, and human emotion and feeling should out rank that in importance. The FACS computer is someting that schools need to be looking into for the care of their students.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d4e5d3e3a05,58F2F77D8FD6,Even though technology is a huge part of the world today to help with certain problem and can be really helpful to people. The author describes the FACS or Facial Action Coding System as a technology to shows a recognition to facial movement. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1204f7446d23,58F2F77D8FD6,In today's society we know that its alot of emotions being shown throughout the world no matter what's the case is. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+060d36d2204c,58F2F77D8FD6,"For example, emotions are hidden by certain people or even people that don't show emotions at all. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffe9ae0686b9,58F2F77D8FD6,"To support my claim is that no matter if parents or anybody tells them something they will not show any type of emotion any type of way, so they use equipment or something such as the FACS technology program. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16bec17e215c,58F2F77D8FD6,The author says that from using the FACS experiment that it will make you feel sightly happy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+223116676a68,58F2F77D8FD6,In my opinion that is not true because that when you are down or upset you wouldn't want to do a experiment just to make you feel happy because you would think the experiment was nonsense. The author also provided us with is that if you raises your eyebrowns when your suprises and around your mouth tightens your lips to show anger is true because the FACS could shows and tell your emotion at anytime and any place. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fdb77566c90,58F2F77D8FD6,"When looking at the Mona Lisa painting it was sucessful and was one of Leonardo da Vinci's biggest accomplishment was the painting of Mona Lisa. Some of the new comptuer software that can recognize emotions, It was sucessful because the software is the latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advance Science at the University of Illinois with collaboration with Professor Nicu Sebe Of the University of Amsterdam. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aae7e1e6bb93,58F2F77D8FD6,"Comparing school computer and FACS is that school computer can recognize if a students is bored , or even confused about a problem there doing on a website such as Mindplay, Khan Academy , Carnige Learning, and etc. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c37a632132de,58F2F77D8FD6,"The FACS is extermely helpful and useful is because the FACS materials can be expressive for video games or video surgery. It can also help with human communication that aew nonverbal including emotional communtication. By according to Dr. Huang notes he says "" So computers need to understand that too."".
+
+Your home computer or work computer cannot modify Mona Lisa smile. To support my claim is in pargraph 7 it says "" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. "" But you can write down some simple instructions that ""encode"" the different emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f84699172fb9,58F2F77D8FD6,"The author says in Pargraph 9 us that the FACS can give you happy face that it can acutally be useful.
+
+It can be false because a fake smile is when you mouth widen alittle bit with no teeth showing , and when using the FACS it can probably not show it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c50c54a8a35b,58F2F77D8FD6,"The FACS technology can be very helpful for counselor, teachers , deans, doctors and even more. When someone is mentally challenge or mentally disabled the counsleor can uses the FACS to identify the mental person emotions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3305d1308f3,58F2F77D8FD6,"It can be helpful with teachers and deans is to identify the different or emotion the child has. For examples, say a child is got bully in the cafeteria for his lunch money and he just walks out the cafeteria with a frown on his face and he doesn't want to show his emotion toward the dean and/or teacher so thats when they can used the FACS technology to figure out there emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5b85d199877,58F2F77D8FD6,"The FACS is very helpful for humans that performs the same impressive ""calculation"" everyday. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e959383d6c6b,58F2F77D8FD6,"Of course, most of us can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look of there face , you can probably tell by the look of there faces when they are happy, sad, worried that why Lenardo da Vinci made the Mona Lisa picture and his crew from making the FACS technology. The author is giving us the mood of encouraging because without the FACS technology then we would never know how people feel when it comes down to the people that don't show emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b70a956d6143,58F2F77D8FD6,"In conclusion , FACS is very useful in many different sceranio. If it wasnt for the FACS technology then we wouldn't know how kids,adults,students,teachers and etc feel. Another thing is that the FACS technology is very helpful because that it can tell if a student is bored , and/or even tired. While a regular computer can tell if the student is bored. I would reccomend this in schools,hostipals, doctors office , or even in the dentist area.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+551844813094,596BD7B2FE5F,The auther supports his idea by writing a paraghragh and putting in ideas or what people reserach. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+017337b6666e,596BD7B2FE5F,The author starts the paragragh by telling us what is venus is and what conditions that the plants has what earth does not have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfd328900089,596BD7B2FE5F,The next thing is that the author said that Venus is the closest planet to the earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. The next thing that the author puts in the paraghragh is that venus go around the sun in diffrent speeds then the earth ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fc7786aaccd,596BD7B2FE5F,I think we should explore venus because venus might have the material that earth has not ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f77d9b1d6c80,596BD7B2FE5F,the second thing is that venus might have new creature that we never seen before that can with stand the conditions that venus has. The third thing is that venus never ben explord before so we might see thing we might not have seen on earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc1211d7fc68,596BD7B2FE5F,The next thing I want to say is that we can use venus as a waypoint for space ships to go back and refule and get things to explore new planets ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ad78e676a0c5,596BD7B2FE5F,"but the conditons on that planet IN the paragragh it said that venus has sulfuric acid in the air is 90 time denst as the atmaspher on the earth. The second thing is that the artical said venus average tempoture is over 800 degrees fahrenhiet and venus has the hottest suface tempoture on anyother planets in our solar system. The third thing is that venus weather presents thing like eruping volcanoes powerful,earthquakes, frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. The artical said that peopel try to get to the surface of venus and it was not working until they made a robot that can with stand the surface for three weeks. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+22d6a200e563,596BD7B2FE5F,The next thing is that long time ago venus use to have thing that earth have to but over time they distaper ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+45d66e94a8c0,596BD7B2FE5F,and have the same surface like earth the nexts thing is that they were thinking to put a huvering vehicle like a plane that can huver over the clouds that can scan the surface with out have something happening but they cannot take samples so they have to get close and personale. so the nasa is tyring to get samples from venus and worrking on the computers that can scan the suface. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c78f9d34ffc2,596BD7B2FE5F,Thats the thing I can sume up from the paraghragh ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aaad25819589,59A14F276C3E,"Summer projects have long been a popular way to ensure that students continue learning during their break. Ranging across subjects, summer assignments encompass everything from math packets to reading lists to art projects. These assignments can be either teacher- or student-designed -- two different styles of learning, but both with the goal of preparing for the upcoming year. Teacher-designed projects often focus on important information for the class and student-designed projects often focus on exploring their interests. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9ac8fbdc58c5,59A14F276C3E,"While teacher-designed summer projects don't necessarily allow students to learn about what interests them, they give students the best preparation for the class ahead ",Position,Effective,,,
+5c64cc3904f7,59A14F276C3E,by emphasizing crucial topics ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8015bcaa1b80,59A14F276C3E,showing how the class will operate. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+13e2d8dd6001,59A14F276C3E,Teacher-designed summer projects prepare students for the course by ensuring that they know important background information that will help them succeed later in the year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+74d0e58a2d6e,59A14F276C3E,"For example, every summer, the math department at my high school posts review packets for each class; these packets are made and edited by the teachers each year and include what they have found to be the most crucial topics for students to understand in order to succeed in their classes. The teachers' experience and expertise make the packets beneficial for students, as all of the information they have selected is considered to be vital. This allows students to be fully prepared for the course, because if they understand all of the background information in the packet, then they have all the tools they need to learn and understand new material later in the year. It also ensures that students do not forget any information they learned in the previous year, or, if they did forget it, that they relearn it. In contrast, if students tried to design their own summer packet, they may waste time reviewing unimportant topics and completely ignore more crucial ones, leaving them ill-prepared for the year ahead. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d14cf509af84,59A14F276C3E,"Additionally, teacher-designed summer projects give students a glimpse of how the class will operate, allowing them to realize the tools needed to learn effectively ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ee32aeba5e82,59A14F276C3E,"When teachers are able to create their own summer projects, they can show students the types of assignments that they will see in class, giving the students ample time to understand and adapt to the teacher's standards. They allow students to not only learn new information, but also new strategies and techniques that will help them succeed during the school year. For example, my friend who attends a neighboring high school had a summer assignment from her AP Language teacher, while I had none. She was able to learn all of the rhetorical techniques her teacher wanted her know, as well as how to approach that level of work, over the summer, leaving her well-prepared for the class when it started. I, however, faced a steep learning curve at the start of the year as I tried to figure out my AP Lang assignments while also trying to keep up with all my other schoolwork. Comparatively, my friend had a much eaiser time than I did because she already knew the neccessary skills, having learned it all over the summer. Therefore, teacher-designed summer projects allow students to see how their classes will operate during the school year and respond accordingly, giving them an easier, more prepared start to the year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9971f839169c,59A14F276C3E,"Despite these positives, some might argue that teacher-designed summer projects do not allow students to explore and learn about their own interests; ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+47fce54cb2a2,59A14F276C3E,"however, this is not always the case. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+118145207d6f,59A14F276C3E,"Teacher-designed summer assignments can be open-ended, allowing students to explore their interests within the confines of a certain theme or structure. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4cc035296d8a,59A14F276C3E,"For example, AP Studio Art students at my high school are required to create a portfolio over the summer with a set number of pieces about the same idea, but they can use any medium they wish, allowing them to express their individual personality and ability. So, while they have to meet certain requirements, they are free to explore new mediums and techniques, as well as showcase their creativity and character. Additionally, teachers can use summer projects as a type of diagnostic, allowing them to assess a class's abilities. If teachers find that the class has a strong grasp on certain skills, then they may be more inclined to allow more student-driven projects during the year. This would allow students to pursue their own interests later in the year, even if they did not have that opportunity over the summer. Teacher-designed summer projects do allow students to learn about what interests them, as long as certain requirements are met. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dcebd59f686f,59A14F276C3E,"In the end, teacher-designed summer projects best prepare students for the upcoming year by ensuring that students posses crucial background information and by allowing them to understand the class requirements and operation beforehand. Teachers hold the most experience, making them the best candidates to show students the tools needed to succeed in their class. Additionally, they have the ability to give students a glimpse of their class, allowing them to learn the necessary information as well as adapt to the teacher's standards and practices. These opportunites combine to ensure that students are well-prepared for the year ahead, as they have been able to learn what they need to over the summer. Students are then able to start the school year off right, possessing the knowledge and skills required to learn effectively. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2548fecf880d,59D72A2EE874,I thinks the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enbles computers to indenify humans emotions is good things ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d55c3e2a880,59D72A2EE874,like what the author says on paragraph 3 because that can helps the people if the computers can indentify people emotions like if they happy or sad ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da13d39f1aa0,59D72A2EE874,"and if it can makes people feels better if the computers help the people like taking them to a websites where they can read a story or others like playing games, listen to music and watching news that make them relaxing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+df926a7d6a8b,59D72A2EE874,"Also I thinks what the sciencetists says on paragraph 1 ""Developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate"", this means that they said like it better for all people if they developing a software that can recognize emotions.
+
+Another good things about the emotion recongnition like what it says on paragraph 4 because the software can also recognize faces on a pictures.
+
+If the new computer software that can tells people emotions, sciencetists should make them more valuable like adding more news features to it and that will make more people to like them.            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c5e9c80423f4,5A1EAD973EF6,The use of FACS should not be used to see if children are happy in the class room. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+61dccdbe33e9,5A1EAD973EF6,The reason being is if a kid is upset about what happen at lunch and doesnt want the teacher to know the teacher shouldn't know ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1aa27a8fdc2,5A1EAD973EF6,IF the kid wanted the teacher to know the kid would stay after class and tell the teacher the proble. i jiust dont think that there should be that kind of technology inside of a class room. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08629add3f1b,5A1EAD973EF6,Now if it was for an expermint to see how you are really feeling then go ahead ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e12eec5a1ee2,5A1EAD973EF6,but only for an expermint ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+337196f803b4,5A1EAD973EF6,the expermint could be hpw many real emotions can one person feel all at the same time. The computer could tell you all the emotions what percent your feeling them and that how you get your expermint. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ece08b5965f9,5A1EAD973EF6,A teacher should not do it to anyone who does not want it done to them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99379ab3caed,5A1EAD973EF6,"That would be the only real problem with having it inside a class room. There could be a public room inside the school for the computer, so kids can go and see what they are feeling before class. That is an option for the school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e24d6faea2c,5A1EAD973EF6,The only way i think it is a good idea to have that kind of tecnology inside school is if it has its own room inside the school. That way all the kids that want to use the computer can use it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+57ae772967b6,5A230824A066,The technology to identify human emotion in my trance of thought its stupid. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+22c0bc269ed2,5A230824A066,I don't think this would be helpful in a classroom because it would just be a waste ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea8b787e5930,5A230824A066,in my thoughts i think it would be a waste because some people that are having a bad day might just want to be left alone and not talk about there problems to people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c84db3787b90,5A230824A066,The computer might be able to detect the persons emotions by characterlise there facial muscles by the expression movements but the student might be annoyed that it does this all the time and doesnt like it ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f9341e99ada,5A230824A066,"In the article it says that "" Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0fb60ca5b13,5A230824A066,here it says that Dr. Huang studies different artists and there paintings and how some showed how they used there emotion and some didn't. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92a99ddb256b,5A230824A066,Its a bad idea to modify a computer to read peoples emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd067be7b8e2,5A230824A066,because when a kid is doing there homework and the kid is bored the computer is going to detect that the kid is bored from doing his/her homework and put a add with a video game and the kid is going to get distracted and fail the assingment. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+962c1da754ab,5A3BABA1AE21,I agree that some schools should let students do summer projects sometime over the summer. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5b9d965d840c,5A3BABA1AE21,staying active ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea7b2309fbbf,5A3BABA1AE21,"not being lazy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+90665637847,5A3BABA1AE21,keeping your brain and yourself on track ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d081d58d2b67,5A3BABA1AE21,"During the summer you should want to go out and enjoy the outside world, you can do other things as well and to be creative about things for your school summer project, other than staying indoors and deciding to only sit around and do nothing. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2348813dc823,5A3BABA1AE21,"the reason I said to stay active is because when you are outside you never know what you will find or discover if you are doing a project, or just simply exploring the world or the envoirment you live in. Discovering new things helps you think about nature and physical activity that is happening all around you. If you are doing a specific project, then maybe you should look for certain things outside, or even think about what would be great to add on to your project. Stay focused and try to look forward into new things that you see for your summer project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e240b17d7d3,5A3BABA1AE21,"for my reason of not being lazy is mostly saying that instead of being at home watching television commercials, or being on your phone all the time, maybe even just sitting and play video games is way worse than enjoying yourself. You could be missing so much fun things that are just waiting for you to explore with outside. It could be new animals you never seen before, something interesting that you might want to experience or hanging with friends. They can even help you on your project to if you want them to join as well. Don't just sit around and put boring things on your project, or words that dont make any since to you or the topic of the project. You want to be creative with your ideas think positive about finding new things and most importantly ,have fun with what you are doing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0517df870aa,5A3BABA1AE21,"Although, you might not be lazy but you must have your brain and yourself on track at all times. School projects are made for you to have fun while doing them, and to meet new people if you are working in groups , or even if you are by yourself and still have positive thoughts for you and your project then everything its going just fine. You must make sure that you feel comfortable to do your school project and to have all the things you need to make your project creative, strong, and well written. Over the summer, you want to go places to enjoy your self and not to sit around and be off tasks all day long. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1648eb2db786,5A3BABA1AE21,", whatever you do over your summer break is up to you ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe01a3eae08d,5A3BABA1AE21,"You can be outside having fun or maybe even inside as well enjoying yourself. Some people would not like to do a creative project outside sometimes but that is okay as well because you can do your project inside too. A lot of times, projects can be for fun or just to be graded when you come back to school. While you are doing your project, it helps you learn more over the summer break and you become interested to do certain things over the break and thats fine to. Being creative is another way of saying, you got this no matter what. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57bc60f35f48,5A3BABA1AE21,"have fun with your project. Don't be afraid to do anything with your project that mainly talks about you or what you like to do in your life. Doing projects makes kids want to do them more over time, and then they might just might, be able to describe many things specifically for their projects. Learning on the other hand, makes you think more than just to not think at all. Just remember, while you are doing these projects once again you must continue to have fun with them. Tell about your life, family, or other and to have a great summer as well. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2e0cbd74c073,5AEA8070C6B1,The author supports his idea by adding tons of pro-Venus exploration details throughout the passage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6ea60440df5,5AEA8070C6B1,"Multiple reasons where given such as comparing Venus to Earth, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d34e683ada7d,5AEA8070C6B1,"looking back at the two planets history, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28456b1057f4,5AEA8070C6B1,shared natural events. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+468e4314eb21,5AEA8070C6B1,All are things that push us to keep observing Venus even with difficult conditions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1a71f5d3a74,5AEA8070C6B1,"In the fourth paragraph of the article, the author talks about how Venus may have once been covered in majestic oceans, and most likely able to support numerous forms of life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdb313b79170,5AEA8070C6B1,The author uses this to explain why astronomers are so intrigued by Venus. Even if Venus is inhospitable right now NASA would still like to explore the surface grab samples and bring them back to be tested. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3257e01239e,5AEA8070C6B1,"Paragraph two elaborates mostly on comparing the planets Stating, ""Often referred to as Earth's ""twin"" Venus is the closest planent to Earth in terms of density and size."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+922638ddb622,5AEA8070C6B1,Connections and inferences can be made from this statement on how Earth and Venus might be similar. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1008afdb3750,5AEA8070C6B1,"in the 8th paragraph the author claims, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1801c36493e,5AEA8070C6B1,technology should grow enough to keep us hungry for exploring Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e81a5b6abbc3,5AEA8070C6B1,In conclusion The author wants us to keep trying to explore venus no matter the dangerous obstacle. He shows this by adding plenty of positive and interesting facts about the relationship between Earth and Venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+50c927f9836b,5AF04068D0B9,Well certenly we all have different facial expressions. But have you ever looked at somone and they look like they are made but they really are not? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fe7a9e6fc32e,5AF04068D0B9,Well I feel that we shlould not use tecnology to view somone's feelings. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+14dabc10340a,5AF04068D0B9,A lot of differnt things can be misunderstood just with one little mistake. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7188e06e50ae,5AF04068D0B9,Tecnolgy does not alwys read ot tell the truth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7af6f7d5c287,5AF04068D0B9,"It will be hard to tell if someone is really mad or has some feelings indide themselves if using tecnolgy. Mayeb the person can be happy and excited from the inside but from they outside they show a differnt facial expression. I feel that tecnology will just mess evrything up. We need to keep it all natural and they was it is now. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+618dcdeb931c,5AF04068D0B9,If somoene is das you can see it nut you don't know how they feel inside. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b50b9a448e54,5AF04068D0B9,You can probobbly draw a picture of them or soemthing instead of using tecnology. Also any type of facial expression sould be valuable in the classroom. You can't really judge a book by it cover. So really there is no need of using tecnology to see somones looks or to make them that way. Everyone has differnt reactions to differnt things. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9cedb136bff1,5AF04068D0B9,So I think that tecnology shpuld not be usted to identify somone or to give them a value. They are how they are and that is how it is. In a classroom ther can also be differnt values and differnt emoltional expressions. Someone might feel down but we don't know that until they talk to us or let us help them. So no tecnoligy shpuld not be allowed to try and guess someone's value or feelings.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8b411e8a348e,5B1286DD196F,Plan My claim would have to be that computers who identify human emotions would be a valubale thinkg because many students come to class felling down or sad sometimes and instead of them keeping i to them selves. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e0800e70597b,5B1286DD196F,"Somebody would hopefully be kind enough and ask if there doing okay or if they need somebody to talk to instead of just having to go thruogh it them selves, just like a child going thru depresion at the end of the day you want to look for those children and help them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb9bb1d35e3a,5B1286DD196F,But another think would be why would we need this in class instead of using money for this technology they should fix the schools and bring more learning experiences around the country instead of wasting money to see how somebody is feeling ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e9669072ff78,5B1286DD196F,youll make somebody happy by just saying have a wonderful day today like the person grading this test i hope you have a wonderful day ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+717d0027dd5d,5B1286DD196F,this invension would be a good project to go around at the airport or banks just to see peoples reaction when they walk in and as there going out to see the diffrence of there face reactions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f97ed5815e1a,5B1286DD196F,"the mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile while it shows how much this computer can do,imagine a computer that knows when youre happy or sad, thatll be really creapy once it knows how you're feeling. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bffdf27e4d67,5B1286DD196F,"LIke example ""if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. but if you frown the next ad will be different."" this sounds good so when you want certain kind of apps to pop up but once the system knows how youre feeling is another thing instead of seeing how im feeling they should help out people in need who need the help to help them keep there emotions better, Also crazy how theis technology would make it easy for a computer to recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48c530301145,5B1286DD196F,My claim would have to be that I would wan this in my class or around my school beacuse i personaly feel like many students will come into school with a diffrent mood if they knew there expresions or feelings are all being detected ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91d038ab8dd9,5B1286DD196F,instead of them coming sad theyll probabaly chear up a bit since they maybe dont want anybody to know how there feeling and itll try to hid it and change there mood from what it was at first. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7b6db16bba1,5B1286DD196F,"This process all beigins with a computer that constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model unit must move like a human muscles. Some coding system facial expressions that its going to be able to read is six basic emotions like happiness,surprise, anger, disgust, fear ,and sadness, many people are not gonna like the idea of this beause people don want to let everbody know what they are feeling or what there thinking of.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+095d6aee747a,5B54CC4A1EBA,This technology should not be used in a classroom environment. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c6b25e9d7c30,5B54CC4A1EBA,This way of telling emotions is just telling your facial expressions but not judging your emotions on the inside. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be44ff719e93,5B54CC4A1EBA,The pronblem is that technology can't tell all emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ecb6f6f9296,5B54CC4A1EBA,"sometimes people look mad or sad but are really happy, if the computer is just looking the expression on your face then its really not doing anything. ""Empathy (feeling someone else's emtional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression""(Ph9), when the author states this it shows that not all of our humanliy facial expressions give off our emotions. They have only tried this on a still frame pricture. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e4b28f7c20f,5B54CC4A1EBA,Emotions are not just expressions on a face but its also a feeling inside so if the computer can actually feel the way someone is feeling then this sort of technology could work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9c3c91b5907,5B54CC4A1EBA,"""of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait...""(Ph5), we have these troubles because we are notfeeling what they are feeling. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff223d9b544f,5B54CC4A1EBA,In all this would not be a good idea because the results would not be accurate. Emotions are like feelings and can't 100% told by a computer. The pricing on this all of this must be tremendous and if school do want this technology they would have to consider that aspect of the deal. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aed4d427aa2c,5B66541ADDCD,Hello everyone I am Luke the Seagoing Cowboy ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ce6999ecf5cf,5B66541ADDCD,Today. I think it will be a great opportunity for you too by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+087ec31dc132,5B66541ADDCD,I started with a help of my friend because I had no choice. He introduced me after the world war II where people still live in the ruins and are starving. It was a good thing for me back then because I had no hope. And that is how it started. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72eded3eaabe,5B66541ADDCD,When i joined the program it was hard definaty it a job after all my main purpose was to go of to the seas to another country and help poeple in needs. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c977dc61bbf,5B66541ADDCD,I was able to go to alot of places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6428d20da87d,5B66541ADDCD,but moving wasent a easy job ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+57c70850a846,5B66541ADDCD,I had time when I broke my ribs and could not even work for our crew and that is not all the tides in the oceans are strong very strong and if you were the night watcher too bad ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e50bcaca5a2,5B66541ADDCD,I turned 18 when i was in way to Greece. I was able to be darte d for military service and they said to countine my military service. I also admit but it was a great oppertunity for me. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cdfddc9e29c7,5B66541ADDCD,There is also a fun side. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35e09f7c119b,5B66541ADDCD,"When all the cattles were gone our crew was able to stay and play games like vollyball tabletennis,boardgames and lot more it is definatly worth it do ing hard work for all that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+886b65d9b889,5B66541ADDCD,"You could also tour the citys I visited the Acropolis,the Gondola ride in Venice,excavaded castle in Crete,Panama Canal an the way to China. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5e3b13136f2,5B66541ADDCD,You can tour big places while you are there. That is one of the big reasons I joined the program ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccf1ce0f379e,5B66541ADDCD,You can really be aware of waht is going on. I saw th ruins and it was really bad horrible all houses colasped... ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+013c9e134565,5B66541ADDCD,You can help people in need and are starving for food even though they did not do any thing wrong. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+376c81b4e2f7,5B66541ADDCD,I felt really pitty for them beacase the war has not started because of them and they are starvng well for no reason. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2cacdc362f6a,5B66541ADDCD,"I really think that you guys should join the program,ofcourse there are though times, but seeing people get satisfied by my work and visting places for free it is definatly worth at least trying out for this program. This program changed my life it might change yours too.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+61554023ecfd,5B6E4D0EEB87,"Some peope think that the landform was created by alien's, but have no evidence. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7be0fb70409e,5B6E4D0EEB87,You can clearly see in the picture that theres a shadow on the landform. People have even proved that it was a shadow on the landform. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12ec1d165ee6,5B6E4D0EEB87,You can also conclude that there are no alien's roaming around in space making face's on landform's. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c47902b56cc2,5B6E4D0EEB87,People have no evidence that there are alien's roaming around in space. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06d22c759993,5B6E4D0EEB87,"Alien's are only in the movie's that you see, that's only my opinion though. Even if there were alien's out there, we should have found them by now. With all our space gadget's that we have that can look deep into space, i'm pretty sure we would have found alien's by now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd0c9be30759,5B6E4D0EEB87,"Even though people have ""spotted"" alien UFO's, they have no proof. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+955c28ac6c5b,5B6E4D0EEB87,"People could have said they even spotted it, but then again since their on video, they could have photoshopped it. People can believe what they want to believe, but if you can see there's perfect evidence, you can't really argue if they have real proof. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bbec38834a37,5B9A44B2CF80,In the passage the Author suggests studying Venus is a worthy pursuit desite the dangers it presents. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b25ee149b40d,5B9A44B2CF80,"In the first paragraph the author says ¨Venus, sometimes called the Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.¨. In that quote it is saying that the Evening star is so bright that someone is not really paying attention could see it because it is so bright it can not be missed. It is also saying that it is one of the brightest points of light which means if you are lost you could look up and hopefully see that star and it will give you some light to find your way. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+11ca6754c1b2,5B9A44B2CF80,"Another quote from paragraph one is ¨However, this nickname is misleding since Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun¨. This quote means that even though Venus looks like a star because it extremely bright, and shows off an extreme amout of light it is a planet. Many people mistake Venus as a star but once they find out it is a planet they are amazed because of the brightness of it ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bfc970f7430f,5B9A44B2CF80,"In paragraph two it says ¨Often referred to as Earths ¨twin¨, Venus is the closest planet to earth in tearms of density and size, and occasionally the closest distance to earth¨. In that quote it is saying that Venus is known as Earths twin because of the size. The Earth and Venus are about the same size. It also says that Earth and Venus have about the same density as each other. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+59357288fb19,5B9A44B2CF80,"In my opinion I think that the planets should all be different sizes and densities because of the fact that everything is different. When it comes to planets they should all be different sizes, so that people can easily point out the planets and be able to name them easily and not get them mixed up because of them looking the same size in the atomosphere ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+49970c0ecb44,5B9A44B2CF80,In the passage in paragraph three it says ¨A think atomosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankes Venus¨. In this quote it states that most of Venus is covered in carbon dioxide. If scientists wanted to go study Venus they would have to have many layers of protection on because carbon doxide can be very harmful to the human body. Especially since the carbon dioxide percentage is so high it can extrmely hurt the human body of anyone that goes to Venus to study it ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1de39fc90ac4,5B9A44B2CF80,My thoughts on this topic are that if they want to study it they should send up a professional to put something on Venus that can dectect any movement or anything on the planet. They should do that so the scientists wanting to study Venus can study it from a safe distance and out of harms way. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d60a788b594e,5BBC05802470,No i think having technology to read a emotional expressions of students. I think that is really not a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+33dc99df949c,5BBC05802470,Why because somebody dont like to know how they feeling some people don't like to express their feelings cause it's nobodys bussnies ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6c628d08848,5BBC05802470,Tell me would you let them use and technology to read your emotions somepeople would say yes somepeople would no because either the way it goes your still messing being in somebodys else bussnies and some people don't like when they do things like this makes people think that where watching their life ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+598c5a06c45e,5BBC05802470,No i disager with the technology to read emotional expression becaue it's like their trying to find a good way to gets us totechnology againts use and try to take over are emotions think about it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd77ac61a116,5BBC05802470,Think about how something bad can happen ifthey use the technology to read expressed something can go wrong to where the technology ain't gone be working like its is supposed i think they trying to use itn against take over are mine makes us feel how they want us to feel say what they want us to say   ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e25cfecd139b,5C01C98F3655,Would you be able to do what Luke Bomberger did? Just step right up folkes and sign up for free today! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7dff03b6689e,5C01C98F3655,We cattle boat sailers don't give up we are resilient. I bet you are resilient to so sign up. You get to travel get to see some places you never seen before. Sometimes you might even go on a avanture. If you dont believe me you can scrutinize this sign up sheet. The ocean wheather can get surreal but we cattle boat sailers dont give up! You get to see China you'll see Europe. While your traveling you get to haul horses and cattle. The horses will have enough food to last for the trip the record for the most trips is nine trips aint that crazy. Well if you sign up today you might be the one to beat that record so get started by signing up right now for free today. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8735b1ddecbb,5C01C98F3655,While your out at sea you can see some surreal things like new kind of fish you never seen or some new kind of shark you never even knew about. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+199d121ce7f4,5C01C98F3655,Life of being a cattle boat sailer is not bad it is kind of fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2fc5a1683a4,5C01C98F3655,Your driving this big ship with horses by your self. Just picture youself out at sea with the wind blowing threw you hair the sound of the ocean the sunset. You can do all those fantastic things all you got to do is sign up now today. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0e49cb773c9,5C01C98F3655,We need moore sailers to help us get these cattle to there destination. The best sailer we had was Luke Boberger he holds the record of the most trips. Luke was as audacious like a lion in the wild. Luke loved doing what he did. The trips Luke had done were unbelieveable. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae0ec7500d01,5C01C98F3655,You get to be at sea with youself a bunch of horses and if you want a friend. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92bf9159fda0,5C01C98F3655,With the ocean wheather you might loose some cattle but its okay as long as you get the rest of the cattle to the destination. We have had some brave and strong sailers but we need more. We need audacious and fearless sailers. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+699a1c666c68,5C01C98F3655,"If you sign up you'll get the im-not-gonna-regret-this kind of feeling. CRACK!Is what the boat does whenever you hit a rock but you wont have to pay for the damage we will. If you want to work for us more than two years the boat you drive will be yours thats right folkes well give you the boat. All you got to do is sign your name and well even throw in a free sailer out fit with new shoes and hat. Once you get the hang of it you'll be like this is a peace of cake. The boat comes with a horn that will-tell-everyone-the-boat-is-okay and so are you,but all you have to do is sign a couple of papers and fill some documents out. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5eb66b28ce5b,5C01C98F3655,We sailers get to travel all arounf the world inmagine how much money you'll get. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c805f2072337,5C01C98F3655,The pay is also great. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97ef29828cfe,5C01C98F3655,You might have to risk your life sometimes ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+46eaa6f49b3d,5C01C98F3655,but you'll be fine. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b1dd12bc272a,5C01C98F3655,"This is all your decision. What the papers say is about your health care,what kind of cattle do you prefer to sail with intell six months later. These are all you decisions but we do need some resilient sailer to help us. Luke Bomberger would of wanted you to help us sail these poor animals. so please sign up today for free.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+783f3bc7cd81,5CC530A8C191,I think that if we ever did find aliens on Mars or even a civilazation we should stay away from it. The reason why is because if we ever did find a other planet we never really be called the only planet in the universe. In the article we found out that we have a new way to find people. We never really thought that their was ever a civilazation on Mars. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+67d9b3e515be,5CC530A8C191,"As we found out that we may have found a way to a other civilazation. I just recently told you that we should never go near Mars. The reason why I told you that is because we don't now their lifes, their ways, or even if they were freindly. When NASA told us that we have a way to find people we should never talk to them. Yes it does show that we had images of planet Mars or even that their might have been a culture. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1207d727c28a,5CC530A8C191,"I have said that we should never really go to planet Mars because if we did we would be the only planet in the universe. This article was very interesting, but I think we should never go near Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9d4f555247d8,5CD0A11E317E,"Why should the creativity of students be suppressed when they have to complete an assignment or project? Summer break is a time of rest and relaxation for kids who work hard to during the school year; consequently, it's inevitable that students will forgot information they have learned since they are not typically using their brain power while relaxing. To avoid this problem, summer projects are assigned to keep the minds of the students active and to prepare them for the next school year. Obviously, many students struggle with these projects because they are required to follow uninteresting, hard to understand guidelines set by the teachers ",Lead,Effective,,,
+30e9a34e4474,5CD0A11E317E,some may agree that giving students teacher-designed summer projects is necessary because it ensures that everyone has the same level of difficulty and students can receive help easier due to the usage of a rubric specifically for the project ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a0f46a09cb7a,5CD0A11E317E,"Clearly, they are incorrect because student-based summer projects allow students to move at a pace that is appropriate for them and give students incentives to work harder. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1020354c1476,5CD0A11E317E,"Schoolwork is difficult to each student for different reasons; moreover, no student is the same and should not have to work at a level that is too difficult for them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f08271784b7,5CD0A11E317E,Teacher-designed projects discourage students from working in such a way that benefits them since they must follow a rubric that limits them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f145b8cde4a,5CD0A11E317E,"That rubric does not give students an opportunity to work in such a way that is unique to them because the rubric requires perfect, ""textbook"" solutions. Also, teacher-designed projects are often confusing and may require thinking that is outlandish, or too difficult to understand. This further proves that projects not created by students aren't beneficial because some students can't grasp onto certain concepts or thinking processes different from the ones they have previously been using. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2756acca88c0,5CD0A11E317E,"some may still agree with assigning students teacher-based projects over the summer because everyone receives the same assignment, therefore the level of difficulty is the same for everyone. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fcbfb6007c9c,5CD0A11E317E,"However, they are incorrect because everyone is unique, has their own way of understanding certain situations, and solves problems in different ways. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b53e879e765f,5CD0A11E317E,Doing something created by you is completely different from doing something made by another person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ec57ead1826,5CD0A11E317E,"When you are given the opportunity to freely express yourself, it will most likely give you incentive to complete it. This directly connects to allowing students to create their own summer projects because giving students the opportunity to explore something that interests them creates motivation. In addition to that, student-designed projects will ultimately lead to better grades. Having motivation to complete something will make you put more effort into the assignment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af27787f5aa2,5CD0A11E317E,some people may continue to insist that teacher-designed projects lead to better scores because students can receive easily help due to the criteria made specifically for the project ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4baa33fb43ad,5CD0A11E317E,"However, they are wrong because student-designed projects are more beneficial to grades because they make students more motivated, and motivation leads to more effort placed into the project. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+50978dc73d44,5CD0A11E317E,student-designed summer projects are a better option than teacher-designed summer projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6a7932379bb,5CD0A11E317E,"students are more motivated to do better on assignments they create and they are able to work in such a way that helps them succeed. It's important to realize that students are not perfect and do not think in the same way that someone else might. Teacher-designed summer projects are not used to ensure that students are trying their best; instead, they are only used to make sure students are doing something that makes their brain work, even if they don't understand it. Repeatedly working on something that you can not comprehend is useless and is not beneficial. We know that the true goal of summer projects is to prepare students for the next school year. If you want students to be prepared, then give them something they not only understand, but enjoy as well.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c8fd69d601d1,5CD16BFB1881,There are many reasons that limted car usage would be good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+393aaf03a6aa,5CD16BFB1881,"70 percent off familys in french and swiss boarder do not own car they dont need them.""When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"". 57 percent of people sold there car and moved there.""All development since world war II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82c2875a3b07,5CD16BFB1881,"In paris they banned cars for a little will because of the pollution making smog. Any one found driving would be fined. Almost 4000 people were fined for driving on that monday and 27 people has their cars impounded for thier reaction. After 5 days the the smog started to leave and they could see beijing, china which are the most polluted citys in the world. In france 67 percent of cars are diesel.
+
+In colombia on car free day people kiked, biked, skated or took the bus on car free day. It was the third start year they had to ban cars to reduce all the smog and people who didnt listen had to pay 25 dollar fine. For the first time other places joined the event to help with the pollution."" These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders,"". 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+71e541c4ca49,5CD16BFB1881,Obama's studys show that more and more americans are not driving and not getting there licenses as each year goes by. And they wonder has america passed peak driving. On april 2013 the number of miles driven per person went down 9 percent. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+856b82f28725,5CD16BFB1881,it is better to not drive for a little than to drive to help pollution from getting really bad.    ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccf62ccc679f,5D01CC697BFA,In 1976 pictures where taken of Mars with the Viking 1 spacecraft from NASA. We have dicovered that the pictures look like a face on Mars. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cb88cb9cac59,5D01CC697BFA,"We can garentee that ""aliens"" did not do this. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dc476d413c30,5D01CC697BFA,From the data we collected it seems to be that Mars was having formations and the ground/rocks looked like it had shadowed a face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a59c5c0c36f3,5D01CC697BFA,"
+Over the years as you can tell in the pictures the face begins to form into something different. The ""Face"" is starting to not look like a face anymore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bded12c978fa,5D01CC697BFA,"If there were life on Mars they would try to keep the form from changing, right? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+37c475103415,5D01CC697BFA,"Yes we know what you are thinking, ""That cant be Mars doing that,"" but we have not collected any data of any sign of life on Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35fb2243bc4e,5D01CC697BFA,We have no reason to believe that Mars has any life form of any kind on it. We have seen from other data though that Mars has been changing and the landforms have changed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aca8b30aca59,5D01CC697BFA,"Futhermore we have concluded that the ""Face"" on Mars is just rock formation. There is no futher information on the ""alien"" therory and that this is out of the picture. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d6b9ebe1367,5D01CC697BFA,"As you can tell in the picture there is other rocks surrounding it and it is just like the other rocks, they have shadows and the ""Face's"" shadow is just more life like. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+873f2997d252,5D01CC697BFA,The formations of every planet have changed and will continue to change so anything can happen next. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fecc7cb1133,5D02A79930D1,If you join the Seagoing Cowboys program i can gurantee sastisfaction. I've been doing this for 2 years and it's been a part of my life. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fd9983e975bb,5D02A79930D1,you go siteseeing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17c15a4f9517,5D02A79930D1,you get to on amazing journeys ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4350dbf352ff,5D02A79930D1,just knowing that your helping someone in need is gratifying ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ef41490c641,5D02A79930D1,"I hope i will see you in the future. May this be your opprotunity to change someone's life . 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+5f8afc8805f5,5D02A79930D1,One of the most enjoyable things to do is go sitesee ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc32cd5f3cb5,5D02A79930D1,"It really makes time fly by so much quicker . I've beenn doing this for what now,2years? And i've already been on 9 trips! Though sitseeing is not the only thing we do we trasport animals to country's in need . So far it's been a huge success and we don't want to look back, not yet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6e50cedbc87,5D02A79930D1,There are there flaws though it's kinda hard to be constantly on the move with a spouse or heck maybe kids too just at home. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+10cd53b6d6dd,5D02A79930D1,"So, why not bring them with you i'm pretty sure we would have more then enough things for you children to do. Remeber this is a very serious and dangerous job . I've gotten through a only one bad injury where I broke a rib .(paragraph7). That will be very unlikely to happen though considering none of my parteners have ever had that happen to them. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8fc7141f29c0,5D02A79930D1,"So as you can see our program will be grat for you with amazing siteseeing , journey's tat are kid friendly, and your helping someone so will you come work for us. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ee9912cf0aa3,5D0C75BD050F,People might agree with Car-free day. But i disagree with it. Now i will tell you three why I disagree. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+329908b90037,5D0C75BD050F,people might be late to work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6beff8e063c0,5D0C75BD050F,people have to pay to take buses or taxi's to go places. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ceed3a06900,5D0C75BD050F,people might not have time to wait because they have to go somewhere urgent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb1cd55aca18,5D0C75BD050F,people would be late to work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+993c25c0966a,5D0C75BD050F,There are people who probaly have to go to work across the city or maybe even another state. Others probaly dont own bikes or any alternative transportation. Few other people are just not fit and would have to stop and get a brake because there to tired. Also people might have night shifts and it would be dangerous to walk the streets at night. Last you might make it late to the bus stop and you'll have to wait forever for it to pass by again. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90bfaef18b3e,5D0C75BD050F,people have to pay for buses or taxi's. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d90ac49ac02,5D0C75BD050F,Sure people have cars but that doesnt mean they make alot of money so in that case they probaly cant afford to take that form of transportation. More than likely the buses and taxi's are raising the prices for that day since alot more people are taking them. Alot of people would be taking this form of transportation so that means you either would be on a packed bus or be waiting for a taxi that has ten other customers waiting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92e41592570c,5D0C75BD050F,people might have to go some where urgent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d1a98d13a5b,5D0C75BD050F,"if someone gets hurt really bad and they cant wait for a taxi to come pick him/her up, he/she could die. Another example would be a pet getting hurt and it has to go to the vet. Taxi's most likely wont let you have pets in the car. And for a fact the buses wouldent let you either. So the pet could die also. You might of forgot to get supplies for your food and the grocery store closes in thirty minutes. If you live far from the grocery store you might not make it there in time ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e6e8f6a8582,5D0C75BD050F,"i dont think there should be a Car-free day. I stated my statements by saying, People could be late to work. People might not have enough money to pay for a bus/taxi. And last there might be an emergency and you need to get somewhere quick and you cant because you cant use your car.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+10af2da9c7ad,5D724F93F765,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author argues the point that exploring Venus is worth the effort and risks exhibited. The author claims that, despite the harsh conditions and deadly atmosphere, this planet is worth travelling to and observing, due to its being the ""nearest option for a planetary visit"". ",Lead,Effective,,,
+fdd2e64390f4,5D724F93F765,"While the author does list a few good reasons for Venus exploration, it is my belief that they also include many reasons not to explore this dangerous planet. This inclusion of the ""cons"" of exploration hurts the thesis more than it helps it, and damages the authors argument. ",Position,Effective,,,
+f821aee65f8c,5D724F93F765,"From the beginning of their argument, the author states that ""no spacecraft survived the landing [on Venus] for more than a few hours"" and that ""not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f585ecd070ff,5D724F93F765,"The usage of these statements creates a negative image, which can lead readers to believe that the exploration of Venus is too dangerous to enagage in. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+792325316bc0,5D724F93F765,"Furthermore, the author uses facts intended to continue to convince readers that Venus is dangerous, when this is exactly the opposite of what the author is arguing for. Making statements which invoke fear or apprehension only pushes the reader away from the topic, instead of influencing him or her to gain interest in it. For instance, when the author uses phrases with negative connotations, such as ""thick atmosphere"", ""corosive sulfuric acid"", ""800 degrees Fahrenheit"", and ""extreme"", they influence readers negatively as well. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+502d179499fc,5D724F93F765,"Similarly, the author provides little reasoning behind the belief that humanity should explore the planet Venus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0acee6012859,5D724F93F765,"Despite claiming that ""Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit"", there is little evidence given that exploring and observing Venus would be of much benefit. In fact, the author seems to have found more evidence against Venus exploration, as the prior paragraph (which listed reasons that Venus was dangerous) was much more explicit and detailed than paragraph 3. The negatives of exploring Venus (such as death and wasted money or time) seem to far outweigh the positives. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+11fa07e9faf4,5D724F93F765,"As the author continues with their argument, readers become increasingly aware that Venus is likely not as beneficial as the author intends to make it seem. With an unlivable biome and dangerous atmospheric conditions, Venus is likely far too hazardous to explore at this time in history, and I believe that the author of this article unwittingly proved so. For these reasons, I believe that the author of this article failed to support their thesis with thorough evidence or detail.       ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5f94e0cdb0e2,5D934B4BED8F,"In Source One the story talks about the advanges of redusing car usage in the German areas. It states that cars produse about 12% of greenhouse gas in Europe and about 50% in major car usage areas in the United States. Also, street parking is generally forbidden on the outskirts of Freiburg. Even though Vauban's street are completly ""car-free"", except the main thoroughfare. Car ownership is allowed, but there is only two places to park, in a large garage outside their development where a space costs $40,000, or in their own homes. Because of this, about 70% of families in Vauban don't own car(s). Along with 57% of people that sold their car so they could move to Vauban.
+
+In Source Two, in Paris, everyone who drove a car was fined, in two days about 4000 peopole were fined? That isnt actually a alot for a whole city, which is great news. Paris uses diesel fuel instead of gasoline, and now Paris is blaming that on their air pollution. Paris usually has more smog than any other European capital.
+
+In Source Three, Bogota, Colombia has the Day Without Cars, where only public buses and taxis are allowed to drive in the city, anyone driving a car will be fined $25. the Day Qithout Cras started in the mid-1990s, and since then 118 miles of bicycle paths have been built. Parks and sport areas have also been built, along with more restaurants and shops near streets that used to be heavy with traffic, but now leave room for people to stop and visit.
+
+In Source Four, it states that in the United States, young people driving decreased by 23% between 2001 and 2009. Recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars and getting fewer licenses each year.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b2efb776f46,5E295D2E7B76,"if we go to the second planet from the sun the gravity would be more tense and would have different affects on humans. the gravity on venus would pull them down more than earth because it is closer to the sun by two planets away. but we also need to think about the air and the atmosphere because if we just go there then we might die. the air on venus is un supportive to humans and the water is not there or it might be a type of water that if you drink it it will kill you. the storms on venus are acid storms, the rain is acid. so i think the only reason why the author is saying that venus is a challenge is because not only the facts above. but also that the fact is that on the serface, temperetures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we humans experience on earth. so he also might be saying that it might be a challenge because if we take a rocket, it might be torn apart if we dont have the right mesurements. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b7f09382080d,5E3A5B645F49,"Most of the residents in Germany have given up their cars.
+
+Vauban's streets are completely ''car-free'', this means that no one except for the main thoroughfare and a few streets on one edge of the community have cars. This movement is called ''smart planning.''
+
+This movement helps the greenhouse gas emissions in Erope. Passenger cars are reponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States, this evidence is given in paragraph 5.
+
+David Goldberg states on paragraph 7 that all the development since the World War II has been centered on cars, he is promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars.
+
+In source 2 the autor talks about one of the biggest advantages of limiting car usage, by cleaning the air from pollution. Cold nights ans warm days cased the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. In Bogota, Colombia they are doing a program that is called ''Car-free'' this is a program that allows people to have a day without using their cars, in souce 3 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4c4ff37c1138,5E57B80BFC66,"In the aricle ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" says that Venus is really good to study despite the dangers you might encounter. The article says that you may study it,imagen all the wonders you can find. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+47de371b47ee,5E57B80BFC66,"Also in paragrpah two it says that Venus and Earth are ""twin"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c5cde8afee4,5E57B80BFC66,"They say that planet Venus has the closest planet to Earth, but the density and size are some what close. It also say's that the speed of orbiting around the sun is close to Mars, and also Venus. Yet also Venus is very close to us that the humans have tried to send spacecraft to land on Venus numerous times. And yet each time was a fail since it only survived for a few hours. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07a7aecbb340,5E57B80BFC66,Also in paragraph three it says that the atmosphere is very thick in Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+191ae5d8169f,5E57B80BFC66,"That it has a 97 percent of carbon dioxide that covers Venus. Also the temperature is very extreme which is why we cannot live in Venus, even though Mercury is closest to the sun Venus is much hotter than Mercury. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4f3ce88d781,5E57B80BFC66,Another reason is that Venus has a high pressure and also heat which states in paragraph three. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12565807a505,5E57B80BFC66,"Venusian geology says that Venus has erupting volcanoes, and very powerful erathquakes, it also has frequent lightning strikes that hits on the land. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e7169ceb08d,5E57B80BFC66,"Also in paragraph four it says Venus was probably coverd in largely oceans which can also supported the various forms of life. Yet also Venus does have some features of Earth, Venus has rocky sediment which includes valleys,mountains,and also craters. Also scientist say that to visit Venus it will take a long time frames of space travel, and also if you want to return form Venus it will be very hard. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5af5345a0cb,5E57B80BFC66,Another reason on why Venus can be dangerous to study is that humans are having an idea on sending humans to Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+07832a379ff2,5E57B80BFC66,"Scientist are coming up with a solution have them float above the fray and not land. They are coming up with ideas of having a blimp like vehicle just hovering about 30 or more miles above the landscape. They may have a vehicle hovering over Venus so it could avoid the ground conditions for just staying off ground. The surface on Venus is around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure is close to the sea level on Earth which says on paragraph five. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30d077ecfb55,5E57B80BFC66,"In conclusion Venus is very dangerous, it has high temperatures and high pressure which the humans can not survive. Earth and Venus may have the same mountains and valleys, but Venus is to hot for us to survive. In conclusion Venus is dangerous to study.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+21975426ce06,5E7DCF4A5293,In this essay i amfoing to be talking about a claim for or against of using technolgy to read students and emotional expressions. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+1a96b8f81091,5E7DCF4A5293,I would say i am on both sides. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6836c8daa8f3,5E7DCF4A5293,i say that because i think it could be a good thing but i also think there would be sone bad things with that too. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4d90b51d4297,5E7DCF4A5293,One reason why it would be good is to see if the person is just not happy at all then you could talk to them and see whats going on with them. So you can see if you can fix it. Another reason why i think its a good thing is because it tell the peron your doing it to and you how there expressions are. I also fill like this could be a good thing because if the person is going threw a hard point in their life then this would be good. The reson why this could be good is because then you could help them out before they do anything to them self. another thing that this would be good for is if you r going to go do something and the other person has a expression on there face you cant tell how they feel about it then yoiu can use this technology to see if it bothers them or not. There was a claim in the story that they figured how the person felt before doing something. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff3714f09fe2,5E7DCF4A5293,"Now, there is some reasons i think this could be bad. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+782eea8e70f4,5E7DCF4A5293,"I think it could be bad because the parents of the kid or the kid himself may not like you doing this sort of thing on him. This is why im kinda on both sides because if they wont done to them I could understand that so thats why i think its fine to not do it if you don't want to. They might not want you to because they might just not want you to know about some of there personal life. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a687e26137cb,5E7DCF4A5293,"In conclusion, these are some of the reasons why i think it should be a thing and some of the reasons why i think it shouldn't be a thing. For the most part I am for it because i think this could help alot of people out. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99f246701fb8,5E879A28D710,"I do not agree with the author in the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" when he describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions works ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6d494f867c0a,5E879A28D710,The use of this technology is to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable to me ,Position,Adequate,,,
+da62b57858ca,5E879A28D710,"There are reasons why I don't agree, and I know that i'm not the only person who disagree with this argument. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05362cdfa476,5E879A28D710,One reason is that schools shouldn't allow anyone to put that technology into their computers because that technology has nothing to do with school or what the kids are learning at school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3172213fdcc7,5E879A28D710,"Another reason is that the way people feel is how they feel, it's not meant for the whole world, the school, or anyone to know how they are feeling if they didn't tell that person ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+967c9a83e939,5E879A28D710,If that person didn't tell anyone that's because they wanted to keep what was wrong with them to their self. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bde07c961ba1,5E879A28D710,"In paragraph three it says that the Facial Action Coding System that is enable in computers can tell if a human is feeling happy, surprise, angry, disgust, fear, and sadness. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65c425bd2b9e,5E879A28D710,"If a student is feeling happy or surprise its okay for people to know, but when a sudent is feeling angry, disgust, fear, and sad it's not because you don't know what that person is going through or how that person is living. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+609a61506f1d,5E879A28D710,This technology that someone came up with is not a good idea. I said it's not because I wouldn't want anyone to know how i'm feeling if i'm not in a good mood. If i'm angry or sad about something I would keep it to myself and not tell anybody because I wouldn't people to kee bringing it up to me when i'm trying to forget about it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7719ac3ac285,5E9118C7949A,"During the summer many students tend to loose the skills and information they gather through the previous school year. Some higher level courses to prevent this problem, implement summer reading activities or online module/guided programs to keep their students on top of the material or to refresh them... but with all schools come different teaching styles. Some teachers strive for their students to be more independent and do the work on their own, but other teachers like to have a rigorous and set rubric or outline of what projects and essays should look like. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6fbb9eb82b5c,5E9118C7949A,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+20fa09999b59,5E9118C7949A,"it eliminates the loopholes that can be found by the students, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7869d94b5362,5E9118C7949A,the teacher can incorporate the summer project into a future theme or unit in the school year ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d388cf9f8bf,5E9118C7949A,if students designed a project for themselves they wouldn't challenge themselves and put minimal effort in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+66f9788e8ca2,5E9118C7949A,Students when they are given freedom or multiple options tend to tweak and stretch the guidelines to make it easier or to even make excuses on why they didn't do a certain part or do it a certain way ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fff087da0142,5E9118C7949A,"If teachers have full control over the design of this summer based assignment they can insure the students will do what they say exactly and theres no if's, and's, or but's about it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2d3458323b8,5E9118C7949A,when the teacher has full control over the summer assignments design it is easier for them to fi the project's theme into the curriculum or unit they desire during the school year. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5497012acf5,5E9118C7949A,"With my AP English teacher this year, 11th grade, I had summer reading to do and an assignment she attached with it. This book ended up tying into other books we discussed in class and fit into the curriculum very well. This shows how it benefits the teachers a lot with workload, and even students, because the assignment actually means something and isn't just a bogus last minute project they could make up and waste their time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65e44152d093,5E9118C7949A,The last example of why a teacher-designed project is beneficial to the students is that it doesn't sell the kids short of their academic potential by just taking the easy way out with an easy project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9592d8750ffb,5E9118C7949A,"Students, or anyone, only grow and develop when they're exposed to challenges and obstacles it builds their mental capacity and their problem solving skills. If a teacher choices to do a particularly hard project or assignment this pushes the students out of their comfort zone allowing them to make these new connections in their brain and gain new knowledge and working skills. But if a kid is allowed to design their own project for the summer, most kids aren't going to do an extravagant or hard project, but instead take a more simplistic and easier way because the students want to enjoy their summer and not waste it on a school project. This would be a detriment to the students academics and the skills they could've acquired if they were to apply themselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+144c93fe4c71,5E9118C7949A,"The opposing idea of a student-designed project can be argued to be beneficial to the students for maybe 2 ways, it allows the student to be more creative and if they can design something they like... they will be more motivated to complete the task. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+aa18e3dc2d5e,5E9118C7949A,"Though these are both good ideas. They don't hold as many pros as the teacher-designed project does. Teachers often add a lot of creativity to their projects and even have a rubric section for maybe 5-10 points just for creativity and colorfulness itself. Teachers also often allow kids to atleast pick the topic of the project or what they want to research to encourage them to do something they like, but still hold the same guidelines for the attatched project. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c4ea37c88a17,5E9118C7949A,"Though sometimes these projects the teachers provide seem tedious, pointless, and ""too much"" the teachers are usually doing it for the students own good and want to see them grow as a student. These teacher-designed assignments allow them to help students through the school year, guide them through lessons, and develop them as a student.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+182c7ff94455,5EA13764DA34,"In the article""A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves"" Luke helped people in WW l l. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2362c6ccd5ec,5EA13764DA34,When you help others they will help you back. It is nesessary to what it important to others. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+af2e0582f8f0,5EA13764DA34,Some people thinks its funny to watch other contenets to bein war. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a02f1fd196e1,5EA13764DA34,I don't like to see our allies in war whille we stayed and watched. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+38c46e03e4b9,5EA13764DA34,When you help others they will help you back in what way they can. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a599c4ef2fee,5EA13764DA34,It could be anything like helping you with building somethin or perhaps makeing dinner and hangging out. All i kmow is it would be the right thing to do. You could be the one who wants to do them a favor or they do you a favor and you want to help them in a way. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a9d02944348,5EA13764DA34,Its important to do what is nesessary. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3add8537c4c,5EA13764DA34,People do what is nesessary for their familys or friends. Mabey even pets. If you don't you might be making a bad choose in what you will do in the future. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20db1e4f04e8,5EA13764DA34,When Luke helped people he is doing the right thing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0140a2470015,5EA13764DA34,"People from WW l l gave their lives to save the place of thins they loved. Even I would give my life for anyone and everyone I cared for. This time he wanted to help them with animals, food, and whatever eals they needed. He played an very important role for the people of Europe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f7e1bc32df8,5EA13764DA34,This shows my reason of Lukes point of view. You should help others when you have a chance and not just sit and watched. I would have volenteered myself to help others in need. He wanted to see the world and have fun al along to help others. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b9b109a3103b,5FB1A7C1D694,"Tim Ryan, an experienced bird watcher once said, ""In middle school, somebody started the weirdest club imaginable... a bird watching club. Being the class clown that I was, my friends and I signed up for the oddest club at school. At first, it was just funny. Then I found myself looking forward to club day. Bird watching was a ton of fun. If I wasn't required to sign up for a club, I would never have found my true passion -- bird watching."" School required extracurricular activities have been controversial for many years. Is it a waste of time? Are the activities even fun? As the years went by, many people started to realize that extracurricular activities are beneficial ",Lead,Effective,,,
+03aafe7fced1,5FB1A7C1D694,Students should be required to participate in extracurricular activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dba8f4dc8379,5FB1A7C1D694,"it can boost their confidence, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a8e356cfc1ec,5FB1A7C1D694,"improve their time management skills, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b55e925a658,5FB1A7C1D694,"teach them how to work with other people, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d2d0dae8b59b,5FB1A7C1D694,they may even find a new favorite hobby. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6240dad611d9,5FB1A7C1D694,"According to a survey conducted by the Activity Observation Committee, 76% of all Generic_City students have found a new, beloved activity that was introduced to them during school. Some people have the courage to attempt a new activity on their own time, but others aren't so lucky. You may think you don't like to do something, but you truly don't know until you try it. Your future won't be resting on that activity. If you like it, then that's amazing. If not, then there is nothing to worry about. You will have tried it and then your source of dislike would be valid. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ba9e9ccdeb65,5FB1A7C1D694,"Generic_Name, a sixth grader from Generic_School, once said, ""I never actually thought that I would be good at a sport. However, all of my friends are good at basketball. When club time rolled around at school, I got pressured into joining the basketball club with them. It turns out that times have changed. I'm pretty good at basketball. I've been feeling much better about myself knowing that I'm good at something."" By requiring students to participate in at least one extracurricular activity, Generic_Name found that she was really good at basketball. A talent could be hidden under your surface. By signing up for a club, it can unearth that special talent. Some students may acknowledge this but are too afraid to try something new. By requiring students to sign up for an activity, the have to take that risk. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d43ba5893698,5FB1A7C1D694,"Generic_Name is a part of his high school's student council. Part of his job is to work with others to cultivate ideas for school programs. The council has taught him the importance of expressing his opinions and ideas. The council has made Evan much more confident about his opinions and now expresses them throughout daily life. A student council is not the only activity that can boost your communication skills. Those skills will increase anywhere that you are working together, which is usually any activity. By improving your communication skills, you are preparing for the future. You will need to be able to have excellent communication skills during college, work, and just daily life. In addition, you could make many friends. According to the Brain Like Mindedness Observation Assessments, people with the same interests typically make better friends. A club is just a bunch of people gathered together doing an activity that they enjoy. There are plenty of chances to make a friend. So next time nobody wants to join a club with you, don't worry. Once you get there you will make many friends. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+939144cc0a58,5FB1A7C1D694,"On the other hand, some people claim that extracurricular activities are just a waste of time. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a836941aa16a,5FB1A7C1D694,"Generic_Name, a member of her high school's softball team stated that, ""I devoted my entire life to a single sport. It was a very bad choice. I had to quit my job and I've had many sleepless nights trying to do all of my homework. Although I love softball, I should have never made this commitment."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0582b224e7d4,5FB1A7C1D694,The only way that participating in an extracurricular activity could be a waste of time is if you aren't managing your time efficiently. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+63f6231ff53f,5FB1A7C1D694,"A study conducted by the Time Management Association showed that 87% of all students that are in extracurricular activities have started to use a calendar or agenda to plan their time. Using your time wisely can be very beneficial when you have many things to get done. It can also help with not procrastinating. By knowing what has to be done and when it has to be done, you are more likely to actually do that work. This will help you prepare for what will come in the future. Your whole life will need to be planned out: when to get groceries, what needs to be done at work, when to go to the dentist, or even when to pick up a child from school. Whatever the scenario is, it is crucial to manage your time wisely. Life can get chaotic and it is important to know how to handle the chaos. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4a95e73bf4b1,5FB1A7C1D694,"Ultimately, participating in extracurricular activities is a very beneficial from a young age. These activities can boost confidence, teach people how to work together, and improve time management skills. So, next time you have the opportunity to try a new sport or activity, go for it! You have nothing to lose and a lot to gain. Suggest clubs and activities to friends and family members. It is important to involve not only yourself, but others too. Remember Tim, the professional bird watcher? If he had never took the risk of participating in the bird watching club at his school, he would never have been discovered his true passion of bird watching. Maybe one day you will be like Tim and participate in an extracurricular activity. You never know... it could shape your future for the better. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+df5b756360a4,5FB75CCB31F8,When it comes to having a computer program to help the teachers know what is going on with the class it should be used. If the program can tell how every kid is doing during class they should be using it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38ccebbaecbd,5FB75CCB31F8,This technology can help with keeping the kids concentrated and help them learn better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8c75fbc11a8,5FB75CCB31F8,If they can tell how the kids feel about a certain subject it can help teachers know that they should stop teaching it and teach another or that they like that subject ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e11b43fe433d,5FB75CCB31F8,IT could also tell the teacher if the kid is struggling with the homework it can tell the teacher to help the kid out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1dec029717ef,5FB75CCB31F8,Especially for the little kids who are to scared to ask questions or even middle or high schooler. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5aa3f9eaf9f4,5FB75CCB31F8,Another thing the Facial Action Coding System could really help with an issue like suicide ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f78375b74858,5FB75CCB31F8,If these programs are telling us that there sad we can ask them if there's anything wrong and if they need to talk to anyone. These outputs of how they feel can help the world especially if it can help catch suicides from happening. These programs could also help teach how a certain test or classes make them feel ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08e5a9e0fe88,5FB75CCB31F8,My only problems is time. If the programs take an hour or more plus time you can't really act on the problem imediatly. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+537ec7fedaf3,5FB75CCB31F8,Also the way that people feel changes so fast that if you do ask how they feel they could be just fine by then. Also ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b391bb2cc626,5FB75CCB31F8,another problem i could see is can it take one face or a whole class room of faces. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8d71aca937d8,5FB75CCB31F8,If it can take a whole classroom and spit out how each individual felt at that exact moment then we should us them in classes ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4b31a514174b,5FB75CCB31F8,If they can not do these things they should be worked on till they can do those two things. These facial action coding system should be improved so that it can fo those two things and be put in all schools as soon as possible. This device can change teaching for good and also save lives in the process.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a34faf0f9040,600959D8A343,"Summer projects are done by many students and are used by schools to assure learning over the break. Summer projects are usually assigned by teachers or by the school so they know what and how the student is doing academically over the summer. Most of the time, students find the summer projects annoying and a nuissance to their break and, thus, do the project later in the summer rather than doing gadually over summer. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+25af3868e027,600959D8A343,"To fix this, students should be able to design what they are doing ",Position,Effective,,,
+8cd4e1192ca8,600959D8A343,"so that it assures the student wants to do the project, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5282d349d2b5,600959D8A343,"the student gets the opportunity to be more creative, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+678d2a434949,600959D8A343,the student get to control their education and independence. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fb7847a91fc,600959D8A343,Having the student design the project they are doing assure that the student wants to complete the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e295036b8cbf,600959D8A343,"A student designed project would allow the student to accomplish what they want. For example, if a teacher gave a student a summer project to do over the summer and the student does not like the project, the student would not be inclined to do the project. However, if the student had designed the project, the student would be more inclined to do it since the student would know what exactly they can and cannot do. The student would also be more excited to do the project and thus complete it. Since the student would want to complete project, they would probably retain the information better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3293809f7af1,600959D8A343,A student designed project would allow the student to be more creative with their learning process and with the finished product in general ,Claim,Effective,,,
+91eba9aecbaa,600959D8A343,"Since letting the students design the project means for freedom, the student could become more creative with what they accomplish. For example, if the student designed a book project, they could make the project a video project or a visual arts project or something that would be entertaining rather than a project like a book summary or a relationship between two things. With more creativity, students get to explore more with the topic and relate the topic to something they personally like. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5396bf6df4c0,600959D8A343,"Most importantly, the student would get control over their education. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c745ed4af708,600959D8A343,"With a teacher designed project, the students would not get that much control over what they learn and would feel dependent on the teacher and not feel ready for the outside world. With a student designed project, the students get to choose what is important to their education and what they need to remember over the summer. The students would also feel a sense of independece from the mostly teacher-based education they normally get. This control and independence would also let the student become prouder of their accomplishment and the finished product. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a30f0be4ebf,600959D8A343,"With the opportunity to be more creative, in control, and independent, student designed projects over the summer would be a great idea for continued learning outside of the classroom. With that opportunity, students would feel a sense of freedom and a sense control over what they are doing. Student designed projects would allow an opportunity for self based learning outside of the classroom. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e2d138f9c675,600D15606C01,"Do you ever want fun activities to do at school? Having an extracurricular activity helps students that don't want to come to school, encouraging them to come more frequently and enjoy the time they have at school instead of dreading school. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+91463fc49862,600D15606C01,I think students having at least one extracurricular activity would be a great idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+887a63e79fff,600D15606C01,students can learn new things for example playing sports includes learning how to play. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+85be13d3728a,600D15606C01,Making new friends in other activities like student council ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+765ec0423bd6,600D15606C01,having interaction with other peers like in the yearbook committee. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9bfe95375195,600D15606C01,"First, extracurricular activity can bring students to learn new things about that specific activity and even the things they learned will help them in real life in the near future ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f66ed7542523,600D15606C01,"For example, FFA can help those students, how to grow crops for food supplies, and how to take care of farm animals like what to feed them that is healthy and nutritious for the animals. Another example is FCCLA helps volunteer at animal shelters or any type of shelter that needs volunteering and even learn how to take care of dogs and cats, how to feed them, and care for those animals that need help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12a853d7c502,600D15606C01,"Second, students can meet new peers and become friends with each other ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8bf83d9bf9c6,600D15606C01,"For example, a group activity that involves five or more people in a group to work on a project, if one student was sitting all by herself and had no one to talk to or work with for that activity and this one person sees them sitting alone at one big table that person might invite her to come sit with them so, they can work on the project together and them two might find they have things income and become friends. Then, that encourages them to help others to become friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+faac0d36e0d7,600D15606C01,"Lastly, interaction with others is very important in these activities ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+527af75456b1,600D15606C01,"For example, working in the yearbook committee involves students to talk about what to do and what to put in the yearbooks, taking pictures might involve talking to communicate where the other student will be while taking those pictures, and printing the yearbook out will need learning how to print papers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e6a865bd5f7f,600D15606C01,"These three examples are perfect reasons for having extracurricular activities for each student in the school today. What do you think about having these extra activities at school? Having activities like this encourages them to come everyday and it makes them enjoy school more than not wanting to come. The school can have many different extracurricular activities they can join for example, sports that helps them how to play it right step by step, the student council helps students become friends and have communication skills and the school yearbook committee helps them with interaction, communication, and teaches them how to take pictures on cameras and print out many different things. This is why I think this school and the students should have at least one activity to do during school hours to keep them busy and want to come to school more everyday.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6414d83a9ce7,60848B9FED16,"Most students after coming from a stressful day in school often choose to lay in the couch, watch TV or play video games and stay up really late, they can even sometimes forget to eat or eat a bunch of snacks. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6c52c5c63dbd,60848B9FED16,"Having students participate in at least one extracurricular activity allows them to socialize with students, participate in activities they enjoy or even find something new to try. ",Position,Effective,,,
+2568268aeb55,60848B9FED16,For some students it can be hard to manage their time at home or might not be able to fit a few hours to complete these activities in their schedule. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+510cfdef5d34,60848B9FED16,"If your having difficulties with time, its important to communicate with your parents, I am sure they can figure something out. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e87eb34c74ef,60848B9FED16,"When students do outdoor activities or school activities it can help them keep things off their minds like, problems at home,in school or in certain places outside. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fdd7c0c8b78f,60848B9FED16,Its important to try keeping stress and anxiety the farthest away from students to help them stay focused in school and become successful. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12476878506f,60848B9FED16,"Wouldnt you rather see your kid doing activities and becoming successful than wasting their young life doing unnecessary things that wont help them later in life? We all want whats best for students and want to help them achieve their goals, which is why we should allow students to participate in at least one extracurricular activity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+11a084409446,609C540CAA76,"Since World War II we have been heavily dependent on the modern day transpotation: the car. Some say the car is an innovative and convienent method of transportation, while others say that it will be the end of the environment. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f0075ae733a8,609C540CAA76,there are advantages to limiting car usage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+856e48502432,609C540CAA76,"Dissenters of the idea claim to say that limiting car usage will negatively impact the car industry, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e72c6cf53c7e,609C540CAA76,but it doesn't. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+27c61a740ba6,609C540CAA76,"Limiting car usage doesn't mean that people will have to stop buying cars; it simply means that they will have to find a different method of transporation. Source 2 says that in Paris on certain days motorist, who had an odd or even license plate number, had to leave their cars at home and find an alternative method of transportation. Does the evidence demonstrate an impact to car companies? Did they have a financial deficit due to their lack of buyers? The answer is simple: no, because they didn't ban the use of cars. Also, car companies can well benefit from places that limit car usage but allow hybrid cars; this allows for an increase in revenue. Most car companies in today's society model hybrid cars that run on primarily electricity and gas. In Paris, they made exceptions ""for plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers (Source 2)"". These exceptions actually promote the buying of hybrid cars! This will boost the economic profit of the car companies, not damage it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+749e38644249,609C540CAA76,"Limiting car usage does not affect car companies, but instead supports it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3aaf3fa5edf7,609C540CAA76,The limitation of car usage betters the environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4ea5f089c5a0,609C540CAA76,"Cars emit greenhouse gases in the atmosphere faster than they can be removed. This causes health problems in living organisms and pollution of ecosystems. Cars are liable for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and 50 percent in areas in the U.S. as Source 1 states. People are playing with the balance of nature and if its not fixed then humans are as good as dead; this is why the implementation of limiting car usage benefits people. The effects of this can be seen in Bogota, Colombia, whose goal is to reduce smog and promote alternative transporation (Source 3), and Paris, where intense smog covered the enitre city: ""The smog rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.(Source 2)"" The source explains that cold nights and warm days trapped in car emissions and after a few days of reducing car usage the air cleared up. This shows the effectiveness of the limiations of car usage. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+298bdde79bb1,609C540CAA76,The limiting of cars also boosts community wellness. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7fc17e2789fd,609C540CAA76,"The people who experienced this regulation had positive views on the matter and even on rainy days they participated! Bogota, Colombia has gone into its third year of banning cars and the turnouts of the pariticipation were large, with two other Colombian cities joining and municipal authorities from other countries to view the event (Source 3). The evidence show that limiting cars wasn't opposed by the people, in fact, other countries were wanting to get in on the action. This limiting of car usage really cuts down on traffic congestion and new community projects have been established to ease the transition to alternative transportation. Heidrun Walter, mentioned in Source 1, syas that when she had her car she always tense and stressed and is happy with the change. The source also mentions that the ""swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor (Source 1)."" This shows that the limitation of car usage greatly enchances the wellness of the community and promotes a safe and stress-free environment for the people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4400e3378da5,609C540CAA76,"In summation, the limitation of car usage doesn't negatively impact car companies, but instead increases hybrid car sale revenue, echances community wellness, betters the environment. The things that can be accomplished with this regulation only has benefits for everyone. With this in mind, why not implement this ideal in order to better the lives of not only this generation but the future leaders of the world?    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12c6d60ee45e,60C9C0AC9F48,Some schools require students to complete projects over summer break to assure that students are still learning while on break. Many of these schools and their students have mixed opinions on if these projects should be teacher designed projects or student designed projects. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1bbbc8261300,60C9C0AC9F48,I believe that these projects should be designed by teachers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a67226bd6753,60C9C0AC9F48,to ensure that students are staying on school related topics ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56ab4ec4a03a,60C9C0AC9F48,so that these projects for students can stay related to school related topics to fully ensure that students are still learning while on summer break ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e131923d3bc,60C9C0AC9F48,"For projects with the intentions to keep students learning while on summer break the first issue would be students making projects on subjects that have no relevance to school, this would be very inefficient in the efforts made by school boards to keep students learning. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e565c92fe22,6100B2E44919,My Claim About The Author Idea That Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's more important because it's the closest planet next to Earth and it gets more attention then the other planets because it's closer to us humans ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+03b2c7f45b57,6100B2E44919,"I jus feel like that's the more important planet & it's value, but my explantion about my claim in this article ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d76213f85cc1,6100B2E44919,"In the article it says Venus is referred to as Earth ""twin"" and it's the closet to Earth & the also call Venus the ""Evening Star"" its the brightest light in the night sky and a another fact I can say it's in between the Sun and The Earth and I think thats why it make it so special even though Mercury is Closer Too The Sun and in the text it says ""Venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in the solar system and Venus haves features that are analogous to those on Earth so in my opinon Venus has almost alot of things to do with or deal with Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5df6b1dc4c22,611BBDDA35CA,"Slip into a world where emotions are easily read. There could be no mind games, no pettiness, and no suffering in silence;this could be the new reality. In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto, he introduces a new concept created by Thomas Haung:Facial Action Coding System software. This programming system allows computers to register all of the emotions on an individual's face, reguardless if they are mixed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ec2b4a89f7e0,611BBDDA35CA,"While some argue that this Facial Action Coding System is a step too far into an innovative future, the advanced program could benefit a multitude of areas. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b795c101050e,611BBDDA35CA,"Thomas Haung's new software would not only find useages in a classroom, but also in daily life. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7fa1e1e569e9,611BBDDA35CA,"Granting teacher's access to their student's feelings could give teacher's insight on how well their concept's are grasping. To further prove the computer's effectiveness, Huang states, ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,"" (D'Alto). In addition to assisting a classroom setting, enabling people to read other's emotions would be benefitial also. Reading into surroundings helps people grow. Knowing what feelings an individual possesses could compell someone to be more considerate or act accordingly to how that individual feels. With that in mind, this program could also strengthen relationships ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e38c8100af02,611BBDDA35CA,"Although the Facial Coding Acting System invades privacy, lessons human interaction, and may not be completely accurate of human emotions, it ultimately serves to benefit. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3442a40b9e8d,611BBDDA35CA,"While privacy concerns are understandable, the possible results after the slight invasion could be more than worth it. An unfortunate day could be quickly turned around if people were aware of the circumstances. Without a situation being addressed, nothing can be fixed;the same goes for a person's emotional state. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+99f821b25cd3,611BBDDA35CA,"However, on the technological aspect, how can one know how reliable a computer is on detecting somebody's facial expression? ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+db28073716e4,611BBDDA35CA,"Dr. Huang addresses this by introducing that the computer first constructs a 3-D model of the face, with all the muscles operating as a human's would. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+30d54a2b1147,611BBDDA35CA,"Dr. Huang also explains that ""the facial expressions for each emotion are universal"" reguardless of the desgree of expression, (D'Alto). Finally, the fear of more computer based activities is rapidly squashed by the contradiction that being more aware should envoke more human interaction, not lesson it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4713f04deee4,611BBDDA35CA,"Initially, the thought of additional advancement of technology is frightening. Predicting ideas is not always a sure way of indicating what will occur. However, after Dr. Huang introduces and explains his new concept of Facial Action Coding System Technology, it is arduous to reject the placement of this software into everyday life. Hopefully, the program will be installed soon so it can start making improvements in various industries across the board. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bcc5363c3f28,6120EF6FC0BF,"Summer projects are a great way for students to stay sharp during their long hiatus from school. The summer should be a time for students to relax and explore their passions without having to worry about schoolwork too much. But they should still have a few projects to do over the break so when they get back to school in Autumn, teachers don't waste time reviewing material their students have already learned ",Lead,Effective,,,
+38c49c505a1f,6120EF6FC0BF, I believe these projects should be teacher designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+360419a49fab,6120EF6FC0BF,so they stick to the curriculum the teachers want to teach ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23e383b29c39,6120EF6FC0BF,"so students can get used to their new teachers assignments before the year starts, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cdc17b37a26,6120EF6FC0BF,"and so the students can have more structure. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+98e612508b9c,6120EF6FC0BF,"
+Teachers should design summer projects so they can follow their curriculum as close as they want ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8fcd2bdfbe85,6120EF6FC0BF,"If the projects were designed by students, they might not cover what the teacher intended to cover. In fifth grade, my teacher told us to do a project on whatever we wanted. The only guideline was that we had to present our findings to the class in some way. The variety of the projects was immense. However, this did not bother my teacher because her goal was to get us used to doing research projects before we went to middle school. While it may have seemed as if we, the students, were designing out own project, we were really doing the teacher designed project of practicing research. Another time, in tenth grade chemistry, our teacher told us for the end of year project to do whatever we wanted. She never specified that it had to relate to chemistry, even though it was implied. So when it came time to present our projects, a group of boys went up to the front of the class and started explaining the rules of spikeball. When asked what spikeball had to do with chemistry they said they did not know the project had to be related to chemistry. Confusion like this is easily caused when the teacher does not design the project and leaves it up to the students. That is why if the teacher wants to stick to their curriculum, they should be in charge of designing summer projects, not students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48969da78dee,6120EF6FC0BF,Summer projects should be a way for students to get used to the type of work they will be doing with a certain teacher in the future ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dd8fb5f705a9,6120EF6FC0BF,"If the students design their own projects, they will not be introduced to their teachers style of assessment until the beginning of the year and will have a harder time on the first few assignments in that class. My ninth grade history teacher was very different compared to any teacher I had before. The first project he assigned was very tricky and I did not really know what to do. I ended getting a bad grade on it but I eventually got used to his project style later on in the year. If he had given us a project designed by him over the summer I would have been more prepared for the first real projects of the year. On the other hand, my ninth grade English teacher gave us a summer reading project of her own creation that really helped at the beginning of the year. By completing that assignment, I was prepared for the year because the reading got me used to the workload of the class, and the project got me ready for future similar reading projects that we did every month. If every teacher assigned a manageable project, designed by themselves, every student would com into that class at the beginning of the year prepared and comfortable with all their assigned projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+82a09f1d0b7b,6120EF6FC0BF,"If teachers create summer projects, rather than students, it gives the students much more structure which is vital for kids, especially at a younger age ",Claim,Effective,,,
+985ecfa769e7,6120EF6FC0BF,"It is important for kids in elementary and middle school to have the leadership of a teacher to rely on. At that age, I hated when teachers gave us total freedom on projects because I would not know what they expected me to do. I needed them to guide me and tell me what the expected out of me, then I would go achieve that. But without explicit directions as a kid, I would struggle to decide what to do to please my teachers ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ebedeb0e4f6,6120EF6FC0BF,"However, in high school, it is better to give students more freedom because in their careers they will not always have someone telling them what to do every step of the way and they will have to think for themselves ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e52f1cab76f7,6120EF6FC0BF,"But, it is not smart to give students complete freedom as they will have someone who wants something specific out of them when they get a job. For example, when I got my first job at an ice cream store I had to figure things out myself as I went, but I could not just do whatever I wanted. I had a task to complete that was specified by my boss, but he was not there every step of the way and left me to figure some things out on my own. That is what summer projects should emulate for high school students, while projects should be much more structured for younger kids. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e043bc0a6622,6120EF6FC0BF,"Summer projects are great for students and teachers alike, but should be teacher-designed because that way it is easier to follow a specific curriculum, it gets the students used to the teaching style of their new teacher, and it gives students more structure in general. All these reasons are very helpful for students and can not be achieved by student-designed projects. That is why all summer projects should be designed strictly by teachers. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0ccc73221647,6141232BA814,In this essay I will be writing a detailed argrument convincing enough for others to join the Seagoing Cowboys progam. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+009492fd0ec0,6141232BA814,"Soon after his high school graduation, his friend invited him to join the program. Luke thought about it and decided to sign up with his friend after he realized it was a once in a lifetime opportunity. Luke knew that it was hard work, but he learned about all hard work on his aunt Katie's farm. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+716279b22f7c,6141232BA814,"This all changed his life, but for the better. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+476cb109f2ed,6141232BA814,"Luke has gone to his first trip for Greece. While he is there he finds beautiful landmarks such as when he saw the castle in Crete and the Panama Canal. He had explored Greece, and seen the Acropolis in Greece. Luke has also taken a gondola ride in Venice,Italy. Bomberger has also had much fun on these trips where he and the cowboys played games such as baseball and volleyball when there was empty holds from where the animals were housed. They would also have boxing, reading, fencing, whittling, and table-tennis tournaments. Luke and the other cowboys got a lot more expeirence working with animals, especially barnyard animals ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80711e8ac207,6141232BA814,"The ""Seagoing Cowboys"" sure learned a lot from these trips. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bbef326856d,6141232BA814,"For Bomberger this has made him appreciate his life more. He has hosted many international students and exchange visitors for this reason. All of his overseas trips have taught him his value and how luck he is. The ""Seagoing Cowboys"" was more to him than an aventure. It was a life lesson. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a298cfa36757,61607C674FA3,"Although the school system has advanced quite far in recent history, there are still plenty of clear problems with the way children receive their education. Many students are constantly stressed out and are not truly learning the material because of it. Additionally, each student may have a different learning style, so it is not helpful to teach them in large groups with the same methods ",Lead,Effective,,,
+934a3429e08e,61607C674FA3,The recent innovation of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) can be utilized by schools to vastly improve the way children are educated. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6918a469fc7e,61607C674FA3,"Many issues with the education system could be improved upon, if not completely eradicated, with the use of facial recognition technology within classrooms ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc0769b612cc,61607C674FA3,"As mentioned in paragraph 6 in the article, FACS can be used to recognize when a student is confused. Schools could take advantage of this technology to notify teachers when a student is struggling with material, and help them get back on track. This would allow teachers to adapt their teaching style to best suit each student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3a14fb6f5ef9,61607C674FA3,"Furthermore, all different ages of students today are constantly stressed out with the massive workload that is forced upon them each day. One of the many consequences of this is that the students may not actually be learning the material beceause of how focused they are on the responsibilities they have for other classes. A facial recognition system such as FACS could be programmed to detect when a student's facial expression demonstrates stress, and notify the school so they can proactively help the student cope with this stress before the situation worsens. This will help the student relax and focus better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e41022219378,61607C674FA3,"The potential of this technology is huge, as it could be used to improve every student's life, both inside and outside of school. If schools were to have the ability to help students with any material they don't understand the first time and asist them in coping with or eliminating stress, it would make the experience of going to school much more enjoyable. This would motivate students to do their best to be successful in school, which would drastically improve their life, as well as society in general. If all schools manage to overcome the technical and monetary difficulties of implementing FACS in teaching, it would benefit everybody in many ways. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+26d209bc8bc8,619224AA3A9A,"Despite the conditions on Venus, the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d365eb62960a,619224AA3A9A,He supprts his idea by showing the reader how important Venus's surface is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e559890f4b8,619224AA3A9A,"He also talks about why scientists are still curious about Venus and why Venus's history can be important geographically. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+59ad58dc8bad,619224AA3A9A,Long ago Venus was very earth like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+336e81e483e2,619224AA3A9A,Venus had a surface of rocky sediment and included familiar features like valleys and mountains. The planet was also largely covered with oceans ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4450d709ea82,619224AA3A9A,"in hopes of venus returning like its older self, scientists are looking into a way to explore the planet ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ba9a0e19bb16,619224AA3A9A,"but with its challenging conditions scientists are looking into more options rather than sending humans which could be disasterous and wouldnt be very safe in those unimaginable conditions. The author goes in depth as to way scientists are trying to find an alternative to sending humans. With ther conditions of Venus its dificult for scientists to find a sollution. Althougth these obstacle, the author pushes the idea to continue the research on venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5fc8d18b1508,619224AA3A9A,In conclusion the author uses good sources to back up his idea on why scientists should continue their work with venus.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f19ee184df99,6198205BB70E,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during break. In doing this, students may be prepared for the upcoming year when they return to school from break. Many people believe that summer projects should be teacher-designed while others believe that they should be student-designed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+899ed0d3dfc1,6198205BB70E,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dd10a0f022d3,6198205BB70E,"motivation, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+85dbaaa0d42a,6198205BB70E,creativity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71c398cfd056,6198205BB70E,productivity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90f9e567a98d,6198205BB70E,Students would have more motivation if their summer projects were designed by themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c6140603397b,6198205BB70E,"Besides in the summer, students spend most of the year under the authority of their teachers. If the project they design is on their own terms, they would have more motivation to actually complete it. Since they are no longer under the school's rule during the summer, students may feel more motivated to do their project instead of being forced to do so during the school year. Students would also have more motivation if their summer projects were student-designed because they would not be expected to meet the expectations of their teacher. If the student designs their summer project to their specific skill set, the student may be more motivated to complete the project because he or she is capable of reaching their own goals. Students would most likely turn in better work because they are not under the stress of their teachers' expectations. Because of this, students would have more motivation if their summer projects were student-designed, ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec8a3bd11556,6198205BB70E,Summer projects should be student-designed so that students may express their creativity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+433635d5d595,6198205BB70E,"Without knowing it, teachers block students' yearn of creativity with their own preferences. If the summer project was teacher-designed, the teacher would provide a rubric that exemplifies the specific ways a teacher wants the project to be completed. In doing this, the teacher is not letting the student use their own creativity to complete their project while still follwoing the rubric, but in their own way.. Creativity should never be restricted by one's own personal opinion. Creativity surfaces better with a clear mind along with a clean slate allowing creativity to flow through. If the summer project was student-designed, the entire project itself would be created from one's creativity and their expression through it. For these reasons, summer projects should be student-designed so that students may express creativity freely. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+80f5214e13b2,6198205BB70E,The productivity that a student dedicates to a summer project would increase if the project was student-designed instead of being teacher-designed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8e8a87bce5cc,6198205BB70E,"Productivity heightens when the task is something one actually wants to be doing. If the teacher is somewhat forcing the task, it will make students back away from what they need to complete. Since the student them self is coming up with the project, they must have more motivation to do so which makes the entire process much more productive. Especially during the summer, productivity may decrease because students are no longer in the correct head space that schoolwork requires. If the project is teacher- designed, then the productivity relating to the project will continue to dwindle as well. If the project is student-designed, the time and effort put into the project would heighten which would increase the productivity of the project as well. Hence my reasoning as to why summer projects should be student-designed rather than having them be teacher-designed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8bb70d1ede2f,6198205BB70E,"Motivation, creativity, and productivity would all increase if students' summer projects were student-designed. If students were able to use their own creativity to create a project to be completed in the summer, it would not only increase students' motivation and productivity during the completion of the project, it would also decrease the amount of stress students tackle because of their teachers' expectations. Therefore, summer projects should not be teacher-designed but instead, be student-designed to ensure motivation, creativity, and productivity. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f1d8b7c69871,619D4176B04A,"With summer break comes the joy of sleeping in and spending the day with friends, allowing students to be free from the stress that school may cause them. However, as students enjoy their freedom, they end up losing the knowledge they have carefully built up over the course of the school year. To combat this issue, some schools have implemented summer projects that students must complete over the course of their summer break. The issue with the mandatory summer projects is whether or not they should be designed by the students or by the teachers. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e9cf7c5cde2e,619D4176B04A,"Some may argue that student-designed projects are more beneficial, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e2b402e0a07c,619D4176B04A,teacher-designed projects ensures that the project's purpose is fulfilled and that student can receive the help they need. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0eb49721159a,619D4176B04A,"While it can be said that creating the project would allow the students to retain the information better, there is no guarantee that the information itself would be accurate. Any student can make a worksheet or an assignment based on what they have learned, but few can do it correctly. If student-designed projects are done incorrectly, then the purpose of the project is completely disregarded; the entire point of the summer projects is to make sure students do not forget valuable information. Having teacher-designed projects is a safer and more reliable option. Teachers have studied the subject for years and have experience, meanwhile students are only just beginning to understand the concepts of the subject. Teachers must be able to determine whether or not what they are doing with their students is not superficial, but actually necessary and needed for the students ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0722362ba5c,619D4176B04A," The projects designed by teachers provide a safety net for their students, while the projects designed by students would be a gamble. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fb4bb56e0a48,619D4176B04A,"Though it is important that students are able to successfully work on their own, their ability to collaborate with peers and help one another is extremely beneficial for them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+769e7857dc43,619D4176B04A,"Making students design their own project is not only extremely stressful, it also isolates them from other students and from help. Teacher-designed projects would be uniform, meaning every students receives the same project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+71a0eac38974,619D4176B04A,"It would allow them to look to classmates for help if needed, or to even work together as a unit to get the project done. The collaboration would lessen the burden on the students and would also let them enjoy their summer break. Creating their own projects would quickly become overwhelming for students, especially if they have no one to turn to for support. Instead of focusing on the information like they are supposed to, the panicked students would focus only on finishing their assignment before it is due, thus defeating the purpose of the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0edb480ea7d8,619D4176B04A,"The main goal of summer projects is to provide students with a way to retain everything they have learned and to be prepared for their next school year, regardless of who creates the projects. To best achieve this goal, teachers should be the ones who design the projects. Teacher-designed projects would provide everything that students will need, as well as allow them breathing room during their well deserved break from school. Overall, teachers designing the projects would be a win-win for everyone involved. The students would feel confident and prepared, while the teachers would not have to worry about going over concepts from the year prior. At the end of the day, as long as the students feel comfortable and prideful of their work that was created by a teacher, then that is all that matters. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cafebfee89c8,61A0FEA827E4,"Greetings ,my name is Generic_Name. I go to Generic_School and I'm a junior this year. I was just recenlty informed that some schools require students to complete a summer project in order for thme to contiue to learn. But now the questions arises, should said projects be student designed or should the teachers design it? Although some would say teacher designed projects are better because the teachers have an understanding in the topic and can provide accurate deatils for better clarity. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d500a1e95e64,61A0FEA827E4,I believe student designed projects are better ,Position,Adequate,,,
+726f024b9f22,61A0FEA827E4,students could develop working enviroment skills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71200d707b4a,61A0FEA827E4,"could make it relativly easy. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+452002e1c0d8,61A0FEA827E4,"By a show of hands who likes summer... because i sure do. Shouldnt summer be a time spent learning or accomplishing other activitys like learning to drive, learning to bake or even learning to maintain a source of income. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b6bceb7f02c,61A0FEA827E4,Student designed projects would be easy and short something that could be done in a short time spand. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7b46fd8bc89,61A0FEA827E4,"Students know students best, plus it could develop skills for future planning ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24dce08a3358,61A0FEA827E4,"course not all of them are going to be the same, some will be easy and others more challenging it can be a brand new experience for the students to design and for the teachers to look upon their ideas. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a631da7071e1,61A0FEA827E4,Another side to look at is if a teacher designs a project soley online. What if i go to a place with no internet? How am i suppose to do so if i cant access the document? Well theres nothing i can really do ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6128491ec86,61A0FEA827E4,if students design a number of different projects some could be on papar and others online that way I could get options on what I'd be ok doing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd708b61bcb5,61A0FEA827E4,"For example some could be just to ""read a book""
+
+or some could even be creative like ""draw a place you visited while over the break"". Point is students have a greater imagination than teachers in most aspects and could make a varity or projects and not just stick to the same one for everyone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd7ce6794758,61A0FEA827E4,"Now for a story. In my entire life ive only had one summer project and it was back in middle school. The goal was to just read a chapter book and then to write about it. That year i had read all 6 of the star wars books from ""Phantom Menace"" to ""The Jedi Return"". But i decided to write about ""Revenge of The Sith"" which is my favorite book/movie from the prequel era. I honeslty didnt know how to start the writing ,as a surpirse to no one I was and still am a pretty weak writer. But eventually I came around to write about Anakins insecuritys and the fact no one was honestly there to help him through his dark time and that it consumed him even making him hurt the ones he loved. Now keep in mind I had finished about a week into summer so I was pretty much free to do what I wanted. That same summer I had traveled to Honduras for 2 and a half months to visit. But as soon as I returned school was satrting and I had completely forgotten about the assignment and to put the icing on the cake It was lost. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a2ed5ccd3067,61A0FEA827E4,I believe student designed projects would be better for its simplicity and for all the groups involved to get a new experience weather its the manner of grading or designing it. Wouldnt you like to have more time to enjoy your summer break or would you honestly prefer a harder time doing whatever the teacher mightve brewed up while on their free time? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+51342d62120b,61AD9851B39D,The author supports this idea ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ad998f370d16,61AD9851B39D,"because the article had stated that Earth,Venus, and Mars are our planetary neighbor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6169268999a5,61AD9851B39D,"Venus has been a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity. The thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and highly corrosive sulfuric acid makes it difficult for spacecrafts to land on the planet. Scientist can't find out what they need to know about the planet. They want to know if there's a way to support life due to finding that Venus was probably covered with large oceans and could have supported life once. Today Venus still has some features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e58c40e57056,61AD9851B39D,The author also stated that scientists would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1fc2a369868,61AD9851B39D,"a vehicle hovvering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out. At thirty-plus miles above the surface temperatues would still be toasty around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to sea levels on Earth. many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machienes to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cedb4016897e,61AD9851B39D,"Simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weks in such conditions. Another way they are tying to study Venus is with old technology called mechanical computers. modern computers are enormously powerful, flexable, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes out to extreme physical conditions. exposing a type technology like a phone or a tablet to acid or heat is capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechnical parts can be mmade more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32b66d9c4d9d,61AD9851B39D,The authors last statment about motivating ourselves to go to Venus is striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus. Venus's value is worth gaining insight on the planet itself. also out of the human curiosity to know more about the plane. The travels on earth and beyond should be not belimited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagintion and innovation. This is what I think the authors claim is about pursuiting despite the dangers. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+053ba760d7d4,61BABBBB9822,"I know some people don't like to go to school and they just want to stay home and play video games or sleep. Rather than going to school, but your parents still force you to go to school. And teachers look confused and saying whats wrong with our students. And don't know what to do. And most teacher are tired of students sleeping and thinking its a waste of their time and most quit. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bd0e0dce5457,61BABBBB9822,Professor Thomas Huang from the Beckham Institute for Advance Science at the University of Illinois and many more. Are working with this computer that can identify your emotion without showing them and they tested with famous painting the Mona Lisa and the results were incredible ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69658c9810d9,61BABBBB9822,the teachers can use this computer software on us so they can get some feedback and fix the problem why do students don't want to come to school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4b3df127e49,61BABBBB9822,I know this machine could be very useful ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2f17a1968c51,61BABBBB9822,to others schools ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4a45731a533,61BABBBB9822,and be useful to the cops or any force. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dea9436b646e,61BABBBB9822,By helping them what they are and justing getting to know a little something about the bad guy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5db559fc8d2f,61C3ADEA1DD5,Do you belive the Face on Mars is made by aliens? The Face on Mars is a landmass on planet Cydonia or Mars. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9c073c318061,61C3ADEA1DD5,I beleive that the face is just a natural land form. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e223b0316bec,61C3ADEA1DD5,The face was found around the 1990s by a ship named the Viking 1 in shearch for a possible landing sites for its sister ship the Viking 2. The face is about 2miles from end to end. A few days after scientists figured it was another Martian mesa NASA reveiled the photos to try to atract public atentin to Mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40c946f9d7c6,61C3ADEA1DD5,People got the wrong idea about the face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e561524c2f63,61C3ADEA1DD5,"they thought that the face was a ""bona fide"" evidence of life on Mars. the face was everywhere it appeared in a Hollywood film, in books, magazines, radio talk shows,and even haunted grocery stores. In September 1997 the Chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program sent a [MGS] Mars Global Surveyor to take a pictuer of the face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e74fe11bca6,61C3ADEA1DD5,As I said befor I belive the face is just a landform on Mars. the mesa or butte forms on Earth to but Mars' land formations are larger that of Earth's in conclusen i hope this essay helped you see that the face is probaly just a landmark. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f84e99c77d02,61DCD93D73F2,"Luke Bomberger worked two part-time job at the grocey store and at the bank. Then his friend invited him to go to a Europe on a cattle boat. It was hard for him to say no but Luke said yes it was a opportunity of a lifetime.
+
+World War 2 was over in the Europe,and many countrys were ruin. To help recover everything 44 Nations joined together to form UNRRA. The UNRRA hired the Seagoing Cowboys for they can take care of the horses,young cow,and mules were shipped oversea.
+
+In August 1945, they had received their orders repoets from New Orleans. They had arrived on August 14 that's the day the Pacific war ended. Don and Lke boarded the ship the SS Charles W. Wooster, and then they headed to Greece. THe SS Charles also had a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oat so they can eat.
+
+Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece.
+
+It took about two weeks to criss the Atlantic Ocean from the east coast of the united states and the a month to get to china. Luke was really busy because caring for the animals during them crossing the ocean. Also he had to fed them and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bages of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. And then he had to clen the Stalls.
+
+On his second trip Luke had to served his night as a watchman. His job was to check on the animal every hour. On this one rainy night after making his hourly report to the captain he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's heart was racing as he shot first toward an opening ont he side of the ship . A small strip of metal along the edged stopped his slid keeping him from flying forward overboard in the dark Atlantic. But he couldn't work for a couple of day because of his cracked ribs.
+
+Luke also had fun on his trip because when the unloaded the animals the cowboys played basketball and volleyball. Also they played table-tennis tournament, fencing, and boxing.
+
+But being a the Seagoing Cowboys was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger . It opened his world it was a greatful opportunitiy for him. It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs. Alot of visitor came over the year to exchange the students to visit. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8ec00644db61,61E75F6539D8,There are many bad reasons why you shouldn't go Seagoing. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+07e9f408d825,61E75F6539D8,One reason is you can get killed and be letf there like Luke almost died. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e704c9d1fc0,61E75F6539D8,Next reason is it's not fit for everyone such as not everyone would like to do this task. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bce1ebda90ba,61E75F6539D8,The last reason is you don't earn any money from Seagoing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f7600092bf7,61E75F6539D8,i know its a opportunity of a lifetime ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6d5aba2a92d2,61E75F6539D8,but think about it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5f67650fe763,61E75F6539D8,"The places you can go such as Europe now thats kind of odd. Of why you you would go in a cattle boat fulled with people you dont know. I'm not saying I would turn down that opportunity but I would think about it for awhile. You dont know where you going to be next you may get a hint or something i wouldn't know but it would be scary if it where myself doing this.
+
+When would you get home? I would always ask myself this quistion if it were me on a cattle boat going to Europe . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bd4c7463387,61E75F6539D8,Also what was the main reason why I took this opportunity. Was the main reason because it was opportunity of a lifetime. Think it over and find 3 main reasons why you took this opportunity. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab54a0c312ec,61E75F6539D8,I understand why Luck did what he did. What im trying im trying to say here is why he crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War II. What I dont unnderstand is what was his main reason. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5ac5054646bb,61E75F6539D8,"To finish up my dissagrement of why someone like me or even you shouldent do this is, did he even help anybody becaue in the promt it didn't tell wither or not if he did. I would think that was that was the most important thing.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+48accb4aacad,61ECCAC44988,Every planet is different and unique in their own way. Every planet is known for what they are and I'm going to talk about Venus. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5b7af062c7ff,61ECCAC44988,"Venus is our second planet in our solar system, many people agree and disagree that studying Venus is and is not pursuit despite the dangers it presents of the author saying and I agree with the author ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b395cadab92b,61ECCAC44988,it could be dangerous enough if someone would go up in space and not be prepared ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+afff9948893f,61ECCAC44988,"Reasons why I think it wouldn't be a good idea because in the text in paragraph six it says that ""Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus"". In my own words I believe it is not safe because what if it doesn't last long ? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c70ea384ad68,61ECCAC44988,I believe that Venus is a good planet but it's not safe studying in Venus. I understand that people may disagree but everyone safety is important first when they go up in space. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6dddeebcd9e9,62BC144D48C1,The new technology called Facial Action Coding System enables computures to identify human emotions. The process begins when the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face. The fourty-four muscles in the model must move like human muscels. Dr. Paul Eckman creator for FACS calculated the emotions of Mona Lisa ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c06b83950048,62BC144D48C1,"I do not believe that FACS is important for the students to learn about. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+16b2b336cd48,62BC144D48C1,This technology is not important to what is going on to in the class room or in todays world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+838a58261228,62BC144D48C1,The students in highschool have other things they have to be getting ready for like graduation. There are standards into graduating on time or even early and I am sure learning how to caluclate emotions from a computer and pictures is not one of them. The technology is in the path of achievment if the activity is in a progam by its self and not in the high school or middle school. Some students are pushing the edge to gradutate as it is. This will be something they will want to do and they cant if they are behind in their classes. These students already have way more technology on their hands now adays than they should. The technology is upgrading each day. FACS is not something that would help someones career with in the futrue. School's should be about helping kids get ready for the future. They should not make everything the students be on the computers. Some people want to contain the knowledgement about the expresstions on other peoles faces than gradution than they should take a class about FACS out side of school. The kid in elementry are not going to know what paper and pencil's even are if we keep coming up this technologys like this that we dont really need. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+129fa8f884b8,62BC144D48C1,"I would not want a computer telling people, or evem myself, what mood i am in. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d6590ff3c621,62BC144D48C1,I know what mood I am in. I would not want my parents to know if I was mad because I would be mad at them and not want them to know. If people wanted you to know their feelings they will most likely tell you how they feel. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+643c5cbade02,62BC144D48C1,The Facial Action Coding System is the waste of a schools money. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eacf5ff53b11,62BC144D48C1,The money that is put into the FACS is way more than a school could possibly They could use the money to fix something around the school. The FACS is just way out of hand. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fbfb600a384,62BC144D48C1,"The new technology called Facial Action Coding System enables computures to identify human emotions. The process begins when the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face. The fourty-four muscles in the model must move like human muscels. Dr. Paul Eckman creator for FACS calculated the emotions of Mona Lisa. I do not believe that FACS is important for the students to learn about. Students should focus on getting a diploma, rather than knowing someones emotions through a computer and picture.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f4abe6582ad3,62CA2951FB9B,I think the facial action coding system enable computer is not good to be in the classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bcf99c81a287,62CA2951FB9B,. why would you have something in there that can be wrong ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eaa0531ff78c,62CA2951FB9B,"people aways think computers will always know it all because they dont. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+88e3e3df1504,62CA2951FB9B,"
+People in this world always going off on what people say or showing them computers dont always be right ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+370a93be239d,62CA2951FB9B,"i would never go and get a computer to help me with my problems because they dont know everything plus why would you want it in the classroom anyway , someone can come steal it or anything you never now a days people is doing all types of stuff ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6ec7ec521435,62CA2951FB9B,But again i think it will be good for to be at school because when the students walks in the classroom they can just have them come to the computer and scan them to make sure they are having a good day and nothing is bothring them ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e1120e60c88e,62CA2951FB9B,"Also they should check them when they come into the classroom because they probaly can be having a ruff day and just going to a hard time , but you can make them happy when they walk in the classroom ny, for example""
+
+using the zygomatic major and different musle , the risorious ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c7bb335c584,62CA2951FB9B,"But to be honest i really think its not a good idea because why you have a computer trying to sovle people problems when you can just have them talk to someone about it , it dont make sense to have extra stuff to help kids when its a soical worker there. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+067e3df43d72,62CA2951FB9B,They need to do something better with they money at the school instead of trying to by nonsense and bring it to the school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a67b3a2b4b6c,62CA2951FB9B,All tho they trying to help the children out and make them better or whatever they trying to do its not not worth paying alot of money for a mixed emotion computer when you can just send them to they soical worker ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c08a73838016,62CA2951FB9B,"But the moral of the story is that no i would never but this comuputer its a good brand to the school and all but i would just not get one.
+
+- but we all know i would never get one of these computers
+
+-This is what i think of the Facial Action Coding System Computer 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e01cd59260f5,62CA32AA1C52,Imagine learning about school during summer break. School should not require students to do summer projects in the summer time. Also school shouldn't ruin students free time. Students shouldn't have to worry about school during their free time. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5392e453cdd3,62CA32AA1C52,Student designed projects would be way better than teacher designed projects because students have more imagination therefore it would make the project more interesting. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c464b23d10ba,62CA32AA1C52,If students designed summer projects it would make learning in the summer time better for students. Also if students design these summer projects it would be more students looking forward to learning during the summer because students know what is interesting to each other. And if students design summer projects there will be more into learning about school during summer. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38ea49868222,62CA32AA1C52,Summer projects should be designed by students because they can influence their peers to be smarter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78d0a8dd8752,62CA32AA1C52,Also if they are designed by students it can keep people off the streets. It can also bring people together and stop a lot of bullying. And when students come together they can make a big impact on the community and influence other to be smart. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae41719f2ad8,62CA32AA1C52,Students make everything interesting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7156b4eccb4f,62CA32AA1C52,School should be a place where you can have fun while learning. If summer projects was teacher designed it wouldn't be fun and nobody would come to school during the summer time. Students can bring the best out of each other and lift each other up when they are feeling down. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d3115c80010f,62CA32AA1C52,Students can bring the best out of other students better than teachers can. Thats why teachers need to be more involved with their students and lift them up. If one student is having fun learning it would influence the rest of them to wanna be smart and do well. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+76984a0b1460,62CA32AA1C52,students should design summer projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0077fb413a28,63001194BE9C,Cars and other transportation vehicles are responsible for most of the world polution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fceaf339c08f,63001194BE9C,it's also responsible for obeasity and overweight ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63c822fe3ec6,63001194BE9C,Because of cars and other vehicles people dont walk or ride bikes ot run anymore because they have a car to take them wherever they want ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05d0f8d8210b,63001194BE9C,When I had a car I was always tense ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+991ee1ca9fae,63001194BE9C,"I'm much happier this way said Heidrun Walter a media trainer and mother of two. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5b47b3c8baaa,63001194BE9C,"Huge impediment to current efforts to drostically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes passenger cars are esponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emission in Europe precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation
+
+Stores are placed a walk away on main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway. Paris enforced partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid 1990s. pitted side walks have been replaced by broad smooth sidewalks rushhour restrictions have dromatically cut traffic and new restorants and upscale shopping districts have crapped up. In the United States the rates of car ownership houshold and person started to come down two to three years before the downturn said Micheal sivak who's a reaserch professormof the university of Michigan's transportation reaserch institute study last found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1957620dd1d0,6300E798D425,"People in science class tries to figher out this girl named "" Mona Lisa Smile"" while they looking at the picture they loooking how she smiles back but they really think she's really kinda angry at the same time and there is other people doing the same thing but with diffrent painting in schools. There's an expert name Dr. Huang, he developing ways for humans and computers communicate even though it's going to take some years. Until they finally finded out they can calculate emotions like math homwork but working with real humans. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3c6463354681,6300E798D425,"The way this process work is to have the computer with 3-D contructs and a computer model of the face and have to build the human like human muscles which it's called ""action unit""
+
+which made by Dr. Huag and Dr. paul Eckman, the creator of facts of ""facial action coding system"". during his own creation he knows the six basic emotions like happiness, surrise, anger, disguet, fear and sadness plus characteristic movements of that new computer model they making out of 3-D.
+
+It says that when the computer model wakes up everyday it have the same impressive calculation so it really means it still acts the same from yesterday like saying when u have a friend that like being happy randomly from yesterday well your friend can still act the same the next day which you is wathing your temper, when Dr. Huang haves a computer soft where that stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f919aa7d58b7,6300E798D425,"When you try to make computer models on your own at home wit a PC it might not work on yours ether way because you'll need a newer model of it so it can work it doesn't have enough storge to carry all tha data, so some people rarely take the long way which is writing it down for instruction that encode different emotions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8ffb9417cff2,6300E798D425,"Even looking in a mirror you can look at yourself and see how you act with your emotions so you can make your own model and aftyer when you are done, you can tell your lab partners to test it out to see if it's really complete to make a fully computer model and that model will have the same emotions as you, plus not only you'll be happy about it you truely know how to reveal so much about the science of emotions.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b0cb014aeb2,63F717BB8C2D,"Within the past decade, humans have watched in awe as technology has improved exponentially, and learned to take on tasks once thought only humans could accomplish. Technology has been taught to communicate, entertain, solve problems, along with many other functions, and now it may be able to teach as well. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f831f17b3825,63F717BB8C2D,"Though we have made use of every technological advancement in the past, this may be one that we should not capitalize on. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a971a33a1e7d,63F717BB8C2D,"Before taking this enourmous step in technological advancement, humans must consider the flaws within this newly developed system, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5e02389b33b8,63F717BB8C2D,whether we are ready to replace teachers with computers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ebff740d58ca,63F717BB8C2D,"Though this new system is an astonishing feat in technology, people muct recognize the flaws within this system as well. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+15131c948c7b,63F717BB8C2D,"As described in paragraph 6, a students facial expression has the power to change a lesson. If this is true, could a student not simply fake an emotion to get out of assignments or slack off by acting confused. The article claims that the software can pick up on fake smiles, but can it detect false expressions for other emotions as well? Another flaw within this system is the emotions the technology is capable of percieving, paragraph 6 disscusses the modification of a lesson based on boredom or confusion detected by the computer, however, neither of these two feelings are listed in the 6 emotions that the software is capable of detecting (paragraph 3). These two major flaws within the software lead to only one conclusion, the technology is simply not advanced enough to take on the role of a teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b348d1d5cf2b,63F717BB8C2D,"Humans must also consider this issue from an ethical standpoint, are we ready to take away the role of teachers and replace them with software? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e1fc3715ed0b,63F717BB8C2D,"Though machines have already taken away menial jobs, such as factory work, teaching is a career which requires a four year college degree and a license. Countless people aspire to become teachers, are we ready to take that away? Even if teachers were to work hand in hand with this technology there would still be flaws. Having a computer read the emotions of a student rather than a teacher would sever immportant student teacher ties, and cheat that student of the oppurtunity of a mentor relasionship. Because people are already capable of reading emotions, it would be foolish to replace that for a less precise piece of equipment. Because of the immportant role of teachers in the lives of students, the push for emotion detecting software in the classroom should be stopped. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+02e07a67f15c,63F717BB8C2D,"Because of the major systematic flaws, and the ethical dilemas accompaniing this issue, it is clear that at least for the time being, the efforts to integrate emotion detecting software into the the cassroom should be put on hold. Though this is an astonishing advancement in technology, there is much to consider before pursuing this movement. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2430b764463a,63FC4B44DCF4,"Car use can be a good or bad thing depending on how you look at it, but most of the time people have strong opinions on car use. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+49f6878a835b,63FC4B44DCF4,Ask anyone if they want to walk 10 miles in the freezing cold weather and a large amount of them would tell you no. Rarely anyone nowadays appreciates the importance o ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20f4e84f1e27,63FC4B44DCF4,"gas consumption, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd995a41f006,63FC4B44DCF4,"global warming, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+322f9a15a728,63FC4B44DCF4,polution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+607e27ac11af,63FC4B44DCF4,and other situatons that happen when cars are used to often or frequently but that never seemed like a problem did it? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f9902642e69,63FC4B44DCF4,Riding bikes or walking of course will save you all of the trouble of having to fill up you're car or pollutting the air and so forth but i feel that it will also be an important insight to appriciate everything before it's gone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55f50731f5b9,63FC4B44DCF4,"Meaning that if you have a car, you automatically think that will make evrything easier which in some cases it will but in life, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c9e67200e9d2,63FC4B44DCF4,"we always ahve to go through things that are hard to get us to soemthing better. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a600c773d642,63FC4B44DCF4,"Getting to the point of why material possessions can sometimes cause people to think that we can't live without certain things is a lesson as to why nobody really ""needs"" anything and that goes for transportation purposes as well.
+
+We all come into this world with nothing, and we leave this world with nothing and if no one can be happy without material possessions then i feel that we havent learned a very valuable lesson that used to be here when nothing stopped us from walking to a friends house to say hello or to simply send a letter in the mail if you wanted to talk to someone. The use of technology and updated versions of things have changed our world completely and no matter what way you look at it, there will always be an opinion that is different from you're own. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44e1040239d4,63FC4B44DCF4,Limiting car use may be useful to others who feel like they want to relieve stress or just want a sense of contentment as they walk down the street and take in thier surroundings instead of worrying about you're mirrors and the annoying person behind you honking thier horn for you to move quicker ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b5fd09237488,64183B7D3207,"Some cities are making themselves car-free. Like in Vauban, Germany; Paris; Bogota, Colombia; and even the president of the United States is trying to ""curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions"" (Rosenthal, Paragraph 29). In Vauban, Germany residents of a community are ""going where few soccer moms or commuting executives have ever gone before: the have given up their cars"" (Rosenthal, Paragraph 1). ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f0bc4c0e2872,64183B7D3207,advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4dfbbebef64b,64183B7D3207,people are happier without cars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84b2c7d5a11e,64183B7D3207,"it promotes the alternative transportation and reduce smog. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5edd80a29263,64183B7D3207,people are happier without cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17661dc36718,64183B7D3207,"""The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. It has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor"" (Selsky, Paragraph 27). ""As a result, 70 pecent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"""" (Rosenthal, Paragraph 3). ""It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without cars in this capital city of 7 million"" (Selsky, Paragraph 21). ""Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called ""smart planning""""(Rosenthal, Paragraph 4). Finally ""the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work"" (Rosenthal, Paragraph 35). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a17d2ca081e,64183B7D3207,"""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city""(Duffer, Paragraph 10). ""Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog . . . [The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known os one of the most polluted cities in the world"" (Duffer, Paragraph 14). ""millions of colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams"" (Selsky, Paragraph 20). Also ""the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped speadily thereafter.... As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995"" (Rosenthal, Paragraph 32). And ""people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession mat find less reason to resum the habit"" (Rosenthal,Paragraph 36). But finally ""Mine (19 and 21) have not botheres to get a driver's license, even though they both live in places where one could come in handy. They organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends"" (Rosenthal, Paragraph 39). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f941d1c0329,64183B7D3207,"those are the reasons why some cities are making themselves car-free. People are a lot more happy with no cars as said from Elisabeth Rosenthal """"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"". And also because people are trying to promote the alternative transportation and reduce smog, thats why Paris ""enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city"" (Duffer, Paragraph 10). ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9f22b8367cbf,6454763B703F,"The summer preceding eleventh grade was by far my most memorable summer for an atypical reason - the summer assignment. This summer assignment, unlike any others, was student-designed. In the same summer I had multiple other summer assignments: annotating a textbook, completing a packet of math problems, and even writing an eight page essay! However, my wise AP Biology teacher decided to deviate from the norm by assigning a student-designed summer project. This project only had one rule: it had to relate to any part of the curriculum. To this day, I can vividly recall details about my project, its relevance to the curriculum, and the biology concepts covered throughout the project. Although many teachers around the globe have difficulties determining whether teacher created or student created summer projects are more beneficial, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ea0a6d655540,6454763B703F,the evidence clearly supports that student created summer projects are more beneficial. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3cbfbffe889c,6454763B703F,"student designed summer projects increase student engagement, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8784b21e5087,6454763B703F,"develop a variety of necessary traits, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62d00fd50f69,6454763B703F,they allow for students to learn more than they would in teacher designed projects. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bd22f5ce2d57,6454763B703F,"Student developed summer assignments are better than those developed by teachers because teachers can eliminate the burden of students who do not complete the assignment, students can connect their interests to the curriculum, and teachers can cover a variety of topics to engage students. Summer is a time for students to relax and take a break from the heavy workload of school. However, it is also important for students to stay engaged by previewing course material for the upcoming school year. Although there are clear benefits to summer assignments, many students decide not to complete them. Teachers have to deal with an annual burden of students who do not complete their summer projects. This burden can easily be eliminated by changing the summer assignment to accommodate for students ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9db8771c560c,6454763B703F,"the implementation of student based summer projects can attribute to a variety of skills necessary in the workplace such as creativity, independence, and resourcefulness. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0be03ddf2826,6454763B703F,"Employers all over the world seek individuals who are creative because creativity drives innovation, which positively impacts the future in many ways. By allowing students to develop their own projects, teachers are fueling creative growth. Not only are they fueling creative growth, but they are establishing independence. Independence is a vital life skill that can contribute to success. When teacher allow students to independently create their own projects, they are supplying their students with the key to success. Independently developed projects also force students to be resourceful. Projects without clear cut instructions cause students to seek alternate sources for their projects. When not equipped with the guidance and resourcefulness of their teacher, students seek sources such as textbooks, databases, and search engines to conduct research and complete the project. Student designed summer projects are crucial to the development of creativity, independence, and resourcefulness in students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b12c32922bd4,6454763B703F,"detractors may argue that teacher designed summer projects connect the student to the curriculum better than student designed summer projects can, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f1b3ace50cdc,6454763B703F,"this is false. Students learn best when they are able to connect their own ideas to the curriculum, explore the curriculum by themselves, and conduct self-learning, all of which are only possible via student designed summer projects. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d261f361f1d7,6454763B703F,"Psychology teaches us the value of peg words, or words that are associated with a concept in order to improve memory function. Similar to how peg words stimulate memory by associating two concepts, student designed summer assignments associate the student's interests with the curriculum, thereby enhancing the student's retention. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6fb201049676,6454763B703F,"Student developed summer projects are integral in a education because it allows students to be more engaged in their learning, create a wide array of skills needed in the workforce, and increase student retention. To this day, I reflect on my AP Biology summer assignment and wonder whether it would have had such a large impact on me if it had been a teacher designed summer project. Based solely on the evidence, I do not believe that the summer assignment would have been beneficial had it been designed by a teacher. For this reason, I encourage teachers across the globe to enforce student designed summer projects in order to create an impact similar to that of my AP Biology teacher.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2ac5a02e11ee,648987861269,The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit ,Position,Adequate,,,
+71208c966051,648987861269,"because it is often referred to as Earth's twin. It is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. A difference would be a thick atmosphere. NASA's solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Humans are curious of what Venus is like.
+
+In paragraph 4, Venus could have once had oceans. It could have supported various forms of life just like Earth. Venus today still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. It has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c6a77499977,648987861269,"If scientists were able to study Venus, it would help us undertsnad the planet more. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ba1d04fe9698,648987861269,It is hard to study Venus ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+521695ab3cf6,648987861269,"because the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Also even more challenging are the clouds. They consist of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. On Venus's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus's atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d442c486963,648987861269,"NASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. They want scientists to be able to float above the fray. It says that solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. These are not easy conditions, but are survivable for humans. It is important for them to get up close and personal despite the risks. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03a25c87809b,648987861269,There are many researchers that are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to study Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fbb803248ce,648987861269,"The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because it is important. Venus is like Earth's twin. It is possible to humans to study this planet. NASA has ideas that will help find ways to study Venus. Technology can also help us in these experiments. In conclusion, Venus would be just another planet like Earth. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+91cbc5dbba51,64E72752757D,"We were up is space circling Mars snapping pictures and trying to find a landing spot for our sister ship Viking 2. Then we had noctice that in one of he pictures there was likeness of a human face. The head of the face was two miles from end to end. So we decide to send the picture back to NASA to see what they had to say about it. There replies where so shocking to us we could not belive it they that the face had been created by aliens. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+56ae58caaa2e,64E72752757D,Our first reponse to them was that it was simply not possible because aliens do not exist. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a91493832979,64E72752757D,Even if they did we did not think that it was going to be possible for them to do something like this. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+23dae7fa922c,64E72752757D,Our second reason we do not think it was aliens was because they would not have the brians to do this ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3c94a0570286,64E72752757D,They would not be able to calculate the right measurments and angles also. Plus we dont think they would be able to survive on Mars because of the conditions that are there. These aliens would just have to be out right smart to do something like this. This is just one of those things that seem impossible for an alien to do. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60977b23b526,64E72752757D,The third and final reason is the point we are trying to get across to you guys and that is that we think is just a natural land form that formed while the planet was being created. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ae9003ffb84,64E72752757D,If we are being logical here we know that the pyrimads were created by humans them selves but do really think an alien could have done this? We do not think so because they are just not as smart and and not as equpit as a human is. We think that it was a land form God decided to give the planet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ee0e79fdd0f,64E72752757D,"
+To wrap up everything about this mysterious face maybe it was created by aliens but we may never know because this face is on a planet where a human would not be able to live and survive to witness the aliens build it. The only people that might have got a chance to witness it is atrounauts that would have been up in space at the time. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5ecdce2d97f1,64E72752757D,We personally think that it is safe to say that God decided to give mars this mysterious land form and not aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6bace3a7ea9,64EE7AB92E51,I think that the use of the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is extremely valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+990df9f5498f,64EE7AB92E51,"The reason why the use of this technology would be very valuable is becuase,imagine a computer that knows when your're happy or sad. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74f9690ffef2,64EE7AB92E51,"For example , if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen .a simliar ad might follow. But of you frown, the next ad will be different. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9e86f1f9ae0,64EE7AB92E51,"First, She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. No that's not your science teacher, grading your latest lad assignment. It's the subject of leonardo da vinci's renaissance painting, Mona Lisa- at least according to some newsoftware that can recognize emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6afc79c571c,64EE7AB92E51,"Imagine if ""A classroom could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" Dr. uang predicts. "" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a375e65e2268,64EE7AB92E51,The same technology can make computer- animated facs more expressive-for video games or video surgery. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af5cbf32d48b,64EE7AB92E51,"Second,""Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,"" notes Dr. Huang. ""So computers need to understand that, too."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+36c31ee82797,64EE7AB92E51,"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down some simple instructions that ""encode"" different emotions. Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facialc muscles. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5a0bb2b022dc,64EE7AB92E51,"Third, ""The facial expression for each emotion are universal,"" observes Dr. Huang, "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4cd4d1deaea,64EE7AB92E51,"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expressions""(like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion - recognition software tracks theese facial movements- ina real face or on the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identitfy mixed emotions(as in da Vinci's master piece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5c00ac2bfaca,64EE7AB92E51,"In conlusion, the use of this technology is very, no extremely important in shcools because it can give the teachers and the principles and idea how to get the students to learn better on what is being taught. The technology can also give the teachers and idea of who is bored or tired, or even who is having a bad, or fantastic day. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e5347ccfc358,64F2F1AEDE19,"Luke had no idea that his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. He was working two part-time jobs in agrocey store and a bank when his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no.
+
+In 1945, World War 2 was over in Europe,and manu countries were left ruins. To help these countries recover their food and supplies,animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to help the nation they are called the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shiped overseas.
+
+By the time he was discharged in 1947,Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acroplis in Greece was special,he says. So taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water. A cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.
+
+It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eatern coast of the United States and a month to get to china. Caring for animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They fed the animals three times a day water,bales of hay,and bags of oats. Stalls had to be cleaned. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7075209e2fe,64F2F1AEDE19,Being a Seagoing cow was much more than an adventure for Luke. It opened up the world to him. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e34f7c934845,64F2F1AEDE19,"""Im grateful for the opportunity,""he says. It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e0538ba7c01,64F2F1AEDE19,"Luke had the best time of his life being a Seagoing Cowboy he didn't no his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. In 1945 world war 2 made places get ruined so he decied to go to Seagoing Cowboys. He help animals like horses,young cows,and mules too. He had so much to do but he did it and yes it was hard but he did what he was suppossed to do. A Seagoing Cow boy was more than an adventure for Luke. It opened the world up to him. He is gratefull of the opportunity ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+23d53d6a85b3,64F7C12F6811,"Our society's reliance on technology has increased significantly in the past few decades.
+
+Mobile phones were once brick-like impractical devices. Since then, they have evolved into sleek mini computers. Now that phones are more portable, people tend to take their cell with them everywhere, including on the road. With the heavy reliance our society has created around these devices, it is, understandably, difficult to resist using them. For this very reason, cell phones pose a great risk to driver's. The distraction imposed by smartphones can be just as harmful as driving under the influence. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4a209db7c4c3,64F7C12F6811,Using cell phones at all while driving should absolutely not be allowed. Any amount of attention diverted from the road is incredibly dangerous. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e0336d869fcf,64F7C12F6811,"
+Some of the most fatal accidents have occured, not because of intoxication, but as a result of texting and driving. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4dafa6561963,64F7C12F6811,"In 2018, 4,637 people died in car crashes due to cell phone use (The Zebra). That is 4,637 lives that could have been spared if it weren't for the recklessness of irresponsible drivers. In 2002, 62% of people owned regular cell phones, while today, in 2019, about 95% of americans own cell phones. 77% of these modern cell phones owners have smartphones, which can be even more distracting (Pew Research Center). In that time, car accidents caused by cell phone distraction has increased from 6% to 25% of all car accidents (Schlossberg 2002, Miller & Zois 2019). There is a clear correlation between the increased reliance of cell phones and distracted driving accidents. The irresponsible actions of these drivers is causing increased danger on our roads. Leniency cannot be accepted. The law should have absolutely no tolerance for this hazardous driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4fc2861a710f,64F7C12F6811,Even the best drivers may be involved in a potentially life-threatening crash while trying to use their phone and drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4cb95e3ea6a,64F7C12F6811,"According to an NPR article on multitasking, when you are ""Switching from task to task, you think you're actually paying attention to everything around you at the same time. But you're actually not ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+599f4f01cea2,64F7C12F6811,"You're not paying attention to one or two things simultaneously, but switching between them very rapidly"" ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d2b957dcc8da,64F7C12F6811,"The article later goes on to state, ""You cannot focus on one while doing the other. That's because of what's called interference between the two tasks."" Based off of this information, it can be inferred the concept of interference is also applicable to using a smartphone while driving. If a driver is busy paying attention to their screen, there is no way they could also be paying close attention to the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bdba04f55e68,64F7C12F6811,Even five seconds of being distracted by a cell phone can be enough time for someone to get into an accident ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a18961daca95,64F7C12F6811,"One personal injury lawyer states, ""A single text results in an average distraction of 5 seconds, during which time a car going 55 mph will travel the length of a football field"" (Miller & Zois). A range this large in a such a short time span conveys how much potential there is for injury when behaving so carelessly. Anyone who may claim it is safe for them to go on their phone while operating a vehicle because they are a master at multitasking is simply overconfident in their abilities. The truth is, it would be impossible for anyone to drive safely while distracted.
+
+With lives at risk, texting and driving should be out of the question. Not only would such negligence put one's own physical well being at risk, but all those around them as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8516b0c478b6,64F7C12F6811,"Thousands of deaths could be prevented each year if everyone were to simply put their phone down while driving. No notification, song, or post is worth compromising the safety of the general public. Ensuring others' security should be a priority for all americans. When one fourth of car accidents involve cell phones, there is a serious problem. Complete focus and concentration on the road while driving should just be common sense. Keep the phone down. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8dc46daa2425,65552A741D2A,Venus is like the non explorable planet. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a23a687c8578,65552A741D2A,The technology we have in the world today is not good enough to wistand the envirnment of Venus with its extremely harsh conditions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0181f318970c,65552A741D2A,One of the things the is keeping people so interested is that Venus at one time was supposedly the most Earth like planet in our solar system. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6da15992b9e3,65552A741D2A,"We have tried to explore Venus multiple times but the explorations have been un named because after a few our the spacecrafts broke or quit on us. We think that this is because of Venuses harsh envirnement constisting of acid rain and clouds, the hottest surface temprature in our Milky Way, and the fact that it is so hard to catch the planet when it is close to our planet. ""Also notteble Venus has the hottest surface temprature of any planet in the solar system, even though mercury is the closest to the Sun"". Thats a reason why we cant land and stay there ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e605a8de6922,65552A741D2A,"One of the reasons we believe Venus used to be like Earth is because of its nottable past. ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8236598a460,65552A741D2A,"We are working on more developed technology as the years go by, but we are still not able tpo land and stay on Venuses surface. We are getting closer but are not ready or prepared to try again yet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e7abec138310,65590D44B68A,I Luke Bomberger am a veteran seacowboy. The segoing cowboy program isn't all hard work. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6b75d4d18f6e,65590D44B68A,You should join the program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8ce470e8b174,65590D44B68A,"it is a chance of a lifetime, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8be435b6ca4,65590D44B68A,"you visit cool places, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a44de01e9a39,65590D44B68A,you get to have fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e26aa956c13a,65590D44B68A,This a one time offer. You don't know how long this opperation will be running. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a85daf30b515,65590D44B68A,"When my friend asked me to do I thought, ""I knew this was an opportunity of a lifetime."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d34a3e4167c9,65590D44B68A,I decided I am going to go. You should go too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40dc0ee03b59,65590D44B68A,you travel all over the world. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f1b4094f94e9,65590D44B68A,"You get to see things that you would never imagen. The places were unbelieveble. When I was a cowboy, ""I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.” Another event I remeber was in Venice were we road a gondola on the streets of water. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef0ba1282ad1,65590D44B68A,"I always liked the end of the trips because after all the hard work we had fun. We had had so many games. ""The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling."" with all these games we never wanted to leave the sea. If you came too, you could do play too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14375e02d11e,65590D44B68A,"After all those years I stopped, but I still remember the adventure. Most of all I remember it was a chance of a lifetime, all the trips we made, and all the fun we had. The trip was definintly worth it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+67f912a2eec0,655EC70088AA,"Based on the passage , the government would like a change in the way people drive their cars around. Some people would just get in the car and ride all day and night if they could. So what do the head source of some countries even took the drastic measures of baning driving due to so much smog and health problems in the air. Almost 4,000 drivers would be fined becuase of their actions to the news.
+
+In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of colombians hiked, biked, skated or took the buses to work. It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the day without carsin this capital of 7 million. Of course the goal was to reduce smog and promote alternative transportation. The turnout was huge, despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on bogota. for the first time two other Colombian cities, cali and valledupar, joined the event. The day without cars is part of an improvment campain that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s.
+
+The United States, with its broad expanses and suburban ideals, had long been of the world's prime car cultures. It is the home of Detroit, which by the way has the most and biggest car production in the U.S. alone, its also the bithplace of the first car ever the Model T. Demographic shifts in the driving population suggest that the trend may accelerate. There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39-year-olds getting a license, while older folk are likely to retain their license as they age ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd3263db4b8b,65AE2F1BF718,"As the author defends the claim that the exploration of Venus is a ""worthy pursuit,"" I, however, believe that this statement is not proven very efficiently. Although the author refers to NASA and the experiments they've carried out, the information just does not sufficiently back up the statement that Venus is a ""worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents."" ",Position,Effective,,,
+97d97ddeffd9,65AE2F1BF718,"The author continuously describes the challenge it would be for humans to carry out the study of Venus from space, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1ef6126b8181,65AE2F1BF718,using terms that convey the assumptions he or she is making based on his or her opinion. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b11524f6bc90,65AE2F1BF718,"Many risks would be taken in order to physically explore Venus, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9530abd86f74,65AE2F1BF718,"As stated in the text, the conditons on the planet are ""far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth."" Even with advanced technology that we have today, the article states that ""no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours."" If the technology we have today can't even survive the conditions on Venus, how are humans supposed to be able to? Even though the author claims the conditions are ""not easy, but survivable for humans,"" the temperature can climb up to over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. These pieces of evidence from the excerpt convey the idea that Venus and its characteristics are far too dangerous for humans to even go near. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f9a8046d772d,65AE2F1BF718,"Even though humans could possibly hover 30 miles above the ground level, the texts states that the vast distance would provide only ""limited insight on ground conditions,"" and it would ""[render] standard forms of photography and videography ineffective."" Along with that, the author admits that ""researchers would not be able to take samples...from a distance."" The challenge that the study provides would simply not be worth the time, money, and risks. If man were to go to extreme lengths to reach within 30 miles of a planet and not be able to collect and evidence or data, it would not be a successful mission if the goal was to obtain new information about the planet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b783460842b,65AE2F1BF718,"When examining the similarities between Earth and Venus, the author uses the word ""probably,"" saying that ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" The word ""probably"" gives off the impression that the author is making an assumption about the fact that Venus could support life just like Earth based on a common feature between the two planets. It is dangerous to make assumptions about subjects such as this, because it would be very costly if it turned out to be incorrect in the end. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a1b55b055943,65AE2F1BF718,"After considering both sides of this controversial claim, I believe the author did not support the claim that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+efa3c72aafb4,65AE2F1BF718,"Although the author referred to the study being beneficial to man's sense of imagination and innovation, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+963ba646d85a,65AE2F1BF718,it is simply just too dangerous. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9612bab38657,65B987E219BE,"As of 2017, an estimated 270 million people have a cell phone in the United States. Cell phones have been an everyday object that is addictive and is used for the majority of a day. In particular, cell phones are commonly used while driving, even though it sounds dangerous. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a4025ed7ae83,65B987E219BE,Driving requires focus on the road as well as the driver's surroundings and using cell phones while driving prevents that from occurring ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1c3ce81b5584,65B987E219BE,"Cell phones should not be used while driving because of the many dangers that tend to result from it. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+cc1be7f80d7f,65B987E219BE,Cell phones are extremely distracting because of the large amount of focus operating one requires. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b23402cb768c,65B987E219BE,"While driving, cell phones divert a driver's visual focus from the road to the screen of the mobile device which is very dangerous. The driver isn't able to see what's in front of them because their eyes are locked in on the screen of a cell phone which can possibly lead to a variety of negative outcomes. Texting while driving can lead to harm to health, government involvement, and vehicular harm.' ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ab3ec0c4d70,65B987E219BE,"1 out of every 4 car accidents are caused by texting while driving and in the United States over 1.6 million car crashes occur annually. That means that every year over 400,000 car accidents result from texting and driving ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f079e44efed,65B987E219BE,Cell phone usage itself has a very negative impact on the body's health due to the blue light it transmits. The blue light hurts the eyes and is extremely detrimental while texting and driving. A driver must have good eyesight so that they are aware of their surroundings but using cell phones/mobile devices while driving hinders that ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+892bb093b4a6,65B987E219BE,Studies have shown that texting while driving makes a driver lose focus more on the road than a driver being under the influence. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aaaeeffe5ab1,65B987E219BE,"Cell phone usage is very harmful because if an accident happens , then several degrees of physical injuries can occur and death can happen if the injuries that result are too serious to treat. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bca910e6250d,65B987E219BE,Cell phone usage while driving should not be allowed due to the risk it has on the health of a driver. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8ace7429086,65B987E219BE,"In most states, texting while driving has become illegal due to the many health risks that result from it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc4413acc543,65B987E219BE,"Police officers have the ability to give a driver a citation/ticket for texting while driving. However, a significantly large number of drivers have found a loophole to evade getting a ticket and/or citation. They would not text and drive but instead they would have their cell phones in their hand but not actually text and drive. In order to counteract this loophole, some states have enforced a policy which states that a driver can be penalized for being in possession of a cell phone/mobile device when the vehicle is in motion. These policies are implemented so that no harm can occur due to cell phone usage while driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eef5a810b5bb,65B987E219BE,"Using cell phones or mobile devices while driving can negatively impact the vehicle that a driver is driving whether it be a coupe, sedan, crossover, minivan, or truck ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+01c5781d71b9,65B987E219BE,"Texting while driving can lead to the quality of the vehicle declining due to any damage it may face such as a wreck. On the financial side, the vehicle's interest rate will most likely increase because texting while driving can lead to receiving tickets and/or citations that a driver potentially may receive.
+
+The vehicle itself is something that the driver should bring into consideration and not use their cell phone/device while driving so that no harm comes to the vehicle. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+00fcd9656dc9,65B987E219BE,The concept of using cell phones/mobile devices while driving is one that needs to get rid of immediately. There are countless outcomes that result from cell phone usage while driving and all of them are negative ones which shows that it should be banned. The health risks are severe as well as the vehicular risks and the government has had to step in because of the realization that using cell phones while driving is a lose-lose situation no matter what.   ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+07c4549753c3,66418ED2289D,"On the first day of
+
+Summer Break one is thinking about all the things he's going to be doing, like:relax all day, go on vacation, hang out with friends or family, play video games, and do non-school related things. Suddenly, he or she gets an email from their teacher saying,""I hope everyone is enjoying summer so far, over the summer you will have to do a project on what you have learned this year."" At the end of the email is the instructions the teacher says you have to do for your project. After reading the email one closes his laptop or turns off his phone with anger, because that one teacher ruined his summer.
+
+How are people supposed to enjoy their summer break when a teacher gives them school-related stuff to do. Some teachers complain all the time about them having to grade all types of work when a student doesnt do his work. Teachers shouldn't complain because,all they had to do is not give students any work especially over the summer. Then that will make the teachers job way much easier, because they won't have much stuff to grade and worry about planning to do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d50c2d2f727a,66418ED2289D,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a61d922fc019,66418ED2289D,"student-designed projects, our more relaxful then teacher-designed projects. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c41a5e0d8a8,66418ED2289D,"Student-designed projects would show more creativeness, and is more helpful. Second, they can show how much one has learned. While teacher-designed projects are much more stressful, one will have to do it rule,by rule, by rule, one little mess up can lower your score by a whole grade. On teacher- designed projects the teacher also won't really tell who learned more, because they will all be very similar. Teacher-designed projects are also boring, because it's better when you can use your own ideas instead of someone else ideas. Teachers most of the time always give the people with the most perfectly organized project the best grade, when they dont even have good facts or anything about the project, while the people with not that good of organization but a lot of good information on the project get a lower grade. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4aa7a4b9f77,66418ED2289D,"One might ask, ""what is the reason for having a project during summer because that is when we have a break from school?""
+
+That's just like saying,""why do athletes like basketball players practice during off season?"" If a athlete does not practice during off season, they can probably lose their skill, be out of shape,and not get any better for the next season. Just like if we dont have any projects or work over the summer we can forget how to do certain stuff, and not be ready for the next school year. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d900792ceb76,66418ED2289D,I still dont agree with the idea of projects during summer though because thats what fourth quarter projects should be about. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bc819b75b255,66418ED2289D,"One shouldn't be forced to do school work over a time when you are supposed to be enjoying the summer off. One of my favorite sayings is from Allen Iverson when he said,""Practice? Your'e talking bout practice? I am an All Star and you are talking about practice?"" That is what I would think about if a teacher emailed me during the summer and is talking to me about doing a project when i should be resting. What's the point of summer if you are just going to be doing school work?       ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9d2e10eca6fb,665F9322C6EF,The gorveners and presitdent are trying to bane cars for good. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+579e86d233b6,665F9322C6EF,they're trying to bane car so that are eviroment get's better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+267dd42c4752,665F9322C6EF,"Second in German they banned cars for couple days and if you refuse to not drive your car you'll have to pay a fine. They have also started this community were you can't drive cars and if you wanted car space it' 40,000 along with the house you're paying for,some people even had to sale their cars just to get an house in that new community. Thrid as a result of 70 percent of vauban's families do not have cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move. Frouth middle class families from chicago to shanghai tend to make their homes and reduce greenhouse gas. Also all of our development since world war 11 has been centered on car, and that will have to change said "" Daivd Goldberg"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eedeb72eb52f,665F9322C6EF,I think it's crazy that Paris has banned driving due to smog ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c65f5fc7346,665F9322C6EF,"First on every Monday no one can drive their cars do due to smog so they're trying to reduce the smoke in the air. Second on that same day people with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 31$ fine. Thrid almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to reuters twenty-one people had their cars impounded for their reaction on the fine. Frouth Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals.
+
+First in Bogota their is car free day spinning into a big hit. Second they pay for you're ride so that you don't drive you're car. Thrid so their turnout was large,despite gray clounds that dumed occasional rain showers on Bogota.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d61751974e1,6680CFA0A5FA,"The way the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite is by , giving facts about the good and bad thingds venus has ",Position,Adequate,,,
+66903cf60c82,6680CFA0A5FA,The author talks about NASA'S possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73c3fee12b25,6680CFA0A5FA,"He also gives examples like , Imagining a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape . just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9919c050d043,6680CFA0A5FA,"The author support's the idea by saying ,"" Each previous mission was unmanned , and for good reason , since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours . Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades . Numerous factors contribute to venus""s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study , despite its proximity to us "". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99de53c032ba,6680CFA0A5FA,Also the author talk's about venius having no value . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0b7abe94a78c,6680CFA0A5FA,The author say's that Venus has no value because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2197d1c1c47,6680CFA0A5FA,"
+
+The author talks about the NASA working on other approaches to studyng venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11e3dbf8e531,6680CFA0A5FA,"Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weels in such conditions . Another thing that the author is also talking about is another project , looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers . These devicers were fisrt envisioned in the 1800s and plaed an important role in the 1940s during world war II .
+
+I Venus at thirty - plus miles above the surface , tempetures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit , but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on the earth . solar power would be plentiful , and radiation would not exeed Earth levels . Not easy conditions , but survivable for humans . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+def720800e28,66ABB3042298,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" believes that studying Venus is something that should be done even though it can be very dangerous. The author gives multiple reasons to why we should explore the planet, or learn more about it. However, some people think the dangers of Venus outweigh the benefits of pursuing research on it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7e6a0338cf9b,66ABB3042298,"The author supports the idea of studying Venus even though it can be very dangerous. He provides many details, and facts as to why it's a good idea. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b45239f2a014,66ABB3042298,"First off, the author tells what Venus is like. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2f46730afc4,66ABB3042298,"He states that Venus is often referred to as Earth's ""twin"". This is because Venus and Earth are close in size, density, and at some points in orbit are the closest planets in the solar system. It is also believed that at one point, Venus was a lot like Earth is now. ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" states, ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our soloar system."". The article goes on to say Venus most likely had large oceans that supported life, and the planet has things like craters, valleys, and mountains that we also have here on Earth. The author including these details helps get the point across that Venus is a lot like Earth, and with the little research been done already, we've found so much. This helps readers understand that the longer Venus is studied, the more we will learn about it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b39dbe2413d0,66ABB3042298,"Next, the author gives possible ways to study Venus safely, and effciently. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+de9445805945,66ABB3042298,"The author states, ""NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."". Stating ways that Venus can be studied with people not being put in danger helps get the authors point across. The article also touches on how floating above the surface could keep those studying the planet safe. Temperatures would still be high, but nothing the spacecraft couldn't handle, the air pressure would be like how it is on Earth at sea level, soloar power would be bountiful, and radiation would be no higher than the levels on Earth. The text then states, ""Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."". Although this would not be an easy job, it is possible to study Venus safely. The details used in this paragraph help convey the authors point that studying Venus can be done safely and that it should continue to happen. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5f8f8a409172,66ABB3042298,"Last, the author gives more ways Venus can be studied safely using different technology. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a18d96ef9878,66ABB3042298,"While talking about different approaches to studying Venus the author states, ""...simplified electronics...have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks..."". This quote also helps the reader understand that studying Venus can be done in a safe and harmless way. Using this new technology could help research on Venus advance, and keep those doing the research out of harm's way. The author then goes on to talk about a different technology that was used in World War 2 that can also be used as a new method to study Venus. These are called mechanical computers, and they use gears and levers rather than the electronics that actual computers use. The mechanical computers are made of mechanical parts which are stronger, so they shouldn't be damaged as easily. These are just a few of the ways technology can help safely advance the study of Venus. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48cb6a2540bc,66ABB3042298,"In conclusion, it is important Venus is continued to be studied and researched. The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" does a great job of conveying to his audience why studying Venus is important even though it is dangerous. In the last paragraph, the author says, ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value..."". Studying Venus can help advance many things, and our knowledge of other planets could grow from this as well. There have been many safe ways found to study Venus, so it should be done. The author also states that, ""Our travels on Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts..."". This quote also shows that the author believes the study of Venus should continue even though it can be dangerous. If we didn't study things just because they're dangerous, then we would have nothing dicovered. The author of this article believes the study of Venus should continue, and does very well at conveying that by telling the audience Earth and Venus are a lot alike, gives new, safer ways to study Venus, and gives examples of technology that could also make the study of Venus a lot safer and easier. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+82b77e5208e2,66B37D7DE0F6,Hi my name is PROPER_NAME and I work for NASA discussing with someone who thinks that the face was created by aliens ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3c4ca5e38416,66B37D7DE0F6,Well it couldn't be created by aliens because we all know is that aliens are not real ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40c9f3383aec,66B37D7DE0F6,When I saw the pictures from 1976 to 2001 I saw one of the pictures and the picture from 1998 ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+33dd85b81baa,66B37D7DE0F6,it looks like that something has hit the face and causing it to destroy it and to me it looks like a metor hit the face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbe3ba87ab08,66B37D7DE0F6,and in 2001 the face looks like its fading away and in 1976 it looks like it was popping out but when a metor hit it its goes away. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d75c7232e2b,66B37D7DE0F6,"""Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photoraping Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept.1997, eighteen long years after the Viking mission ended."" Paragraph 6 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b8bfd2cd0e7e,66CBBA95F7C0,"When Alexander the Great led the great conquest of the Old World he never ceased his search for knowledge and the pleasure of learning. Taught by Aristotle, a great philosopher, Alexander expanded his intellectual frontiers of philosophy and culture with every new victory. He recognized that even during the periods of downtime in his empire, there was much to learn. Similarly, many schools require their students to participate in summer assignments built to prepare their minds for the upcoming year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3faf23175dc3,66CBBA95F7C0,"However, while some advocate for teacher designed summer programs, schools would provide summer assignments that benefit the students more if the assignments were to be designed by students ",Position,Effective,,,
+b7ebc874da4e,66CBBA95F7C0,Student designed assignments would provide future classes with the necessary skills they need in a manner that emphasizes the experience of the student in the class rather than teaching the content in a non-classroom setting ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5a0b463b622,66CBBA95F7C0,"Student designed assignments would teach the style of the class, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a0515a0b2edb,66CBBA95F7C0,expose the rigor of the content ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0491b6bb303f,66CBBA95F7C0,test the readiness of the students before they enter the door. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+556987a6249b,66CBBA95F7C0,"No two classes are taught the exact same. When teachers standardize the content of their summer assignments between other teachers and themselves, they lose the ability to expect their students to perform at the specific standards of the teacher and present information in a style at which they deem is appropriate ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+67475f47e08b,66CBBA95F7C0,Having students design the summer assignments would allow future students to realize what stylistic choices the class may require and how the day to day of the class operates. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6da587c8c722,66CBBA95F7C0,"A teacher's reality of a class that they teach differs greatly from that of the student's. Students would be able to suggest to future students helpful tips that would help them from day one of the class such as the teacher liking when students turn in assignments at a certain font size or type or the teacher prefers active over passive voice when writing. Additionally, student designed assignments would give future students the opportunity to see what the class is really like. A teacher may overlook the fact that their class etiquette and canon is to start with a warm up, then work through problems, and finally teach new material. Students who have grown accustomed to a certain style of classroom procedure would have the opportunity to give future students the appropriate expectations of what class is really like prior to the start of school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+52f1cb999b0e,66CBBA95F7C0,Student designed assignments would educate future students as to what kind of work ethic is needed for such a class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5dd3183c2b51,66CBBA95F7C0,The teacher may have one perception of how rigorous a class is. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+39e98dc142f7,66CBBA95F7C0,"However, the students' overall concensus as to what the work load is would be more congruent with how future classes would perceive it. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+2b41c1504a39,66CBBA95F7C0,"The teacher may assume that the work load distributed throughout the year is extremely light and requires very little effort. As a result, the summer assignment may inaccurately portray the course work. A student with the experience of working through the class would have a keener understanding of what to expect from the class in terms of rigor and would hopefully reflect their experiences in the assignment. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65e2717ff9eb,66CBBA95F7C0,"Lastly, student designed assignments would test the capabilities of the student more accurately. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1371325f9b55,66CBBA95F7C0,"When a teacher designs a summer assignment. The content is focused on learning two weeks worth of course related information prior to attending school. Student designed assignments would, in turn, test the intellectual cognition of future students. This would weed out students who may learn come October or November that they do not have the necessary skills to succeed in the class and it is not worth their efforts to continue. Student designed reports would test the readiness of the future students. Furthermore, many AP and advanced classes require students to understand and know how to use the jargon of the classroom. Such vernacular includes contextualization, thesis statement, historical analysis, free-response question, and document based question. Prior to their first day in an AP class, students are widely unfamiliar with the language and testing system of their class and therefore struggle with the tests and essays in practice. Student designed reports would expose future students to this material as well as test the individual's ability to perform at a satisfactory level in the class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c43f1211d0f,66CBBA95F7C0,"While some teacher designed assignments benefit the students by learning factual information that will benefit them over the first two weeks of school, student designed reports would enable teachers and students to have a better academic relationship over the course of the entire school year. By exposing the students to the style, rigor, and expectations of the class, students will know what they are getting themselves into far better than if they were to read and annotate a book that is relevant for the better half of a month. Students would also give future students the ability to practice their skills if they so choose to do so; preparing future students for the essay styles of rhetorical analysis, document based questions, and free response questions that are synonymous with the AP brand. Because of these reasons, teacher designed assignments holds a dim candle to the flaming torch of student designed assignments that would benefit future classes throughout the entire year. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bc32caccb339,66CE6C9D0594,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+569010e9083d,66CE6C9D0594,"I think the author has some valid details that support his claim, and it's enough to want to take a chance and know about our neighboring planet, Venus. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+198e1984cd88,66CE6C9D0594,simplified electronics ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d0a50a99b5fc,66CE6C9D0594,mechanical computers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19257851e35a,66CE6C9D0594,"The author states that, ""NASA is working on different approaches to studying Venus."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+671106cd81f0,66CE6C9D0594,"One of these approaches are the simplified electronics that were tested in a chamber that is supposed to simulate Venus' chaotic surface, and lasted for three weeks. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa8c18433cc0,66CE6C9D0594,Another approach is mechanical computers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+464c9fcbb55b,66CE6C9D0594,"which, ""were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II."" This device does not require electronics and they ""make calculations by using gears and levers."" Any regular, modern computer if exposed to acid or heat are capable of melting, as well as cell phones and tablets. This shows that devices that use mechanical parts can tend to be more resistant to such pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56db9f423450,66CE6C9D0594,"I have concluded that though it is risky and dangerous to study Venus, I think it's worth knowing about it and it's contents. It's a great challenge for us humans but that is what makes it worth knowing about. What if Venus excedes our expectations and we find something that could possibly be life impacting? I think the danger and doubt would be worth it and our thoughts and assumptions would rest at ease. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f9dc906ed7e3,672B0070EEE9,"The author of this essay suggests that they definately know Venus and have done their research on this topic before. There is quite a bit of information in there to handle all at face value, percentages and dates gallore. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+27d6d114928d,672B0070EEE9,I have come to the deduction that the author very much desires for scientests to explore Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ae755ef498b0,672B0070EEE9,"According to the essay, Venus is often refered to as eaths twin because ofit's similar size, density and occassionally the close distance to earth. Another fact is that They took the time to research Venus' atmosphere, which is 97% carbon dioxide blankets over the planet itself. It goes on to inform us about the weather systems and the environment Vus really holds behind those thick blankerts of gas. Another supporting claim for their research is that they go through the history of what we know about Venus and or speculate it was like. Thhey also talk about what the future could look like if we do intend to explore Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0b2a30da7dfa,672B0070EEE9,"IN conclusion, this author is extremely passionate about out 'twin' planet and it is very clear to see that theywish someone would go out there and explore. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c847f3f8ae8a,67311650D333,"Today in the 21st century , phones have evolved to more of a necessity than that of a want. Almost everyone has phone these days and use it very frequently. Cell phones can be very distracting in every day activities like school , work , and worst of all , driving . The United States 1 out of 4 car accidents is due to driving while using a phone . That's 1.6 million crashes per year ! The use of phones while driving has escalated over the years and it is getting more prevalent ",Lead,Effective,,,
+dadc402650aa,67311650D333,actions must be taken to not have drivers to be able to use cell phones in any capacity while operating a vehicle ,Position,Adequate,,,
+55b2aa828a04,67311650D333,One reason as to why people should not be able to use their phone while driving is because the risk of death is so high ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6a1d135e8558,67311650D333,"The use of cell phones while driving now has taken place as the leading cause of death in the United States . The leading cause before that was drinking while driving . Statistically ,1 in 4 car crashes in the United States are caused by the use of cell phones while driving . 391,000 people were injured due to that in 2017 which doesn't even compare itself to the low number of 39,773 gun deaths in 2017 . Both of these are horrible situations to ever be in but a lot of people are ignorant to the toll driving while using your cell phone is . Though the numbers are generally associated with teenagers , these statistics could be any ones' life . Life is precious and the fact that it can be lost for some careless act is not ideal and should be stopped . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e026e34090e9,67311650D333,"Not could self phone use while driving be the cause of your own death , it can also be the cause of death of those around you as well ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+03da74dc5403,67311650D333,"Some people view it was selfish that one person would risk sending a text knowing that it has the potential to kill an innocent person or peoples . A text can always wait when others' lives are on the line . Its an over-estimation of one's personal confidence when driving . Noone that texts and drives really thinks and analyzes the hard that they are doing or can do to all the people in the cars around them . In the cars are innocent mothers , fathers, children , veterans , teachers ect . It goes without saying that they don't deserve to die due to someone thinking that because they've texted and driven before , noone will die . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7b03db4807a5,67311650D333,The actions that can be taken now to prevent so much fatalities currently is to lead by example . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+adaf7ca78a09,67311650D333,"Even if at a red light , don't be a selfish person and respond to a text . If the temptation is too high , turn your phone off or put it away somewhere in your car . Make sure to be alert of your surroundings and stay focused while driving . And if one day it so happens that the person who is driving you happens to be texting and driving , speak out . If you would want to help the cause you can always speak out and promote safety in you community . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b2fdec5f2e7a,67311650D333,"Too many people have lost their lives due to either their own decision to text and drive , or someone else's selfish decision . Many companies and state governments are currently trying to fix these horrible statistics and put and end to texting and driving . States have already passed laws to make is illegal to be using the phone while driving . Our current culture has become too dependent on technology and we must learn to resist the temptation and impulse . We must realize that life is too precious and too valuable to let it be taken away due to a text message . Once we and other people realize how deadly and dangerous texting and driving is , we can prevent the statistics to grow even more for future generations .       ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f0be72fa7471,67348F433E43,I do not agree that the face on Mars was made by aliens for a couple of reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d82751fb6c40,67348F433E43,The reason one because nobody has found life on Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99668e1841f8,67348F433E43,Only samples that they can never find to be true ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98131f2ea996,67348F433E43,Another reason for my disagreement is because even if there were some aliens that made that face the government wouldn't leak that information to the public ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebbd55c8ed6a,67348F433E43,because that is something they would call classified just to keep everybody from going insane. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eeebd4fadcfc,67348F433E43,"I also disagree because in paragragh seven when they flew over Cydonia for the first time on April 5,1998 they said that there was no alien monument after all ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2d616d5fac2,67348F433E43,"From my understanding what the last paragrah is saying is it is just a landform not created by aliens just made by land such as dirt,dust,mud or whatever is on that planet. Also in the three pictures that look like they are changing every year they took the pictures so maybe Mars has storms which causes the dirt or dust to shift or move around I mean u wouldn't say the aliens know what time the scientist take the pictures so the change the look of the face that would be outragoues. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+edea7869310e,67348F433E43,"The last reason for me thinking that the face is a landform and it was not created by aliens is because it clearly states in the reading that they found out it was just a ""messa brutte"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81c93460357e,67348F433E43,which is a landform so that gives the answer right there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67677db87f17,67348F433E43,This is why I degree with whoever says that aliens formed the face on Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+62a88263af72,6776B92E4513,"During summer break, many students are busy on vacation or are preoccupied with other activities. Because of this, students are not reinforcing what they have previously learned or preparing for the upcoming school year. Summer projects are an efficient way to get students familiar with and exposed to concepts they will learn in school and bolster their knowledge. However, the decision of making summer projects either teacher-designed or student-designed creates a debate of the effectiveness of both types of projects. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a09fe5a16656,6776B92E4513,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8276dd619ceb,6776B92E4513,"as teachers are more knowledgeable with the curriculum which will allow them to prepare an assignment that is more effective for the student, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4ee959fc9949,6776B92E4513,teacher-assigned projects will provide a guide for what the students will or should learn ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5839a3b62c60,6776B92E4513,"students will most likely feel more prepared for school with an assignment created by the teacher. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b7916428a78,6776B92E4513,"Since teachers know more about the subject they teach more than the students, having teachers create their own assignment for their students will be more effective ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3f95956a628e,6776B92E4513,"They know what the students need to learn based on the curriculum, so it is ideal for them to decide what they should study over the break. Students will get more out of the assignment if the teacher prepares an assignment that relates directly to what they will learn in class when school begins. It will also strengthen their knowledge and possibly reinforce what they had learned before. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a0587047787,6776B92E4513,Teacher-designed projects will be a guide for students during their summer break to study useful information for their classes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6adc1db30653,6776B92E4513,"Teachers can design projects that is relevant to the curriculum of the class and plan out what is necessary and useful to know versus what is not. In addition, teachers usually expose basic ideas and important concepts that will help students to make connections to what they learned through the summer assignment. These teacher-designed also provides some insight for the student on what to expect in the courses that they take. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+334491e61be5,6776B92E4513,Having teachers make their own summer projects will expose the material that students need to know when they go back to school. It will help students to feel more comfortable coming to class and ready to begin learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1243449e7d24,6776B92E4513,"Through these projects, students have studied and have a better understanding of the curriculum of the class as the teacher directed the students on content they need to know. These projects also help students to gradually feel familiar with concepts they learn in the beginning of the school year rather than jumping straight ahead to learning something new. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13668274cc41,6776B92E4513,"Not only do teacher-designed projects enforce learning and help students to get more comfortable with the content of the class, but they also prepare students before the upcoming school year begins. It is ideal for teachers to design such projects as they know most about the curriculum of the class, and it allows them to prepare a useful tool for students to study to get familiar with concepts and important ideas of the class. These projects are a small exposure of what students are expected or need to know and will help them to be more successful when they begin learning in their classes.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+46fc00c63561,67780BCAD15F,"Cars are an integral part of many peoples' lives around the world: they provide transportation to work and home, they cater to social lives, and for some they even provide a home. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a0aba79c02cb,67780BCAD15F,"However, it's becoming a trend to limit car usage, particularly in Europe ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a160adda51a6,67780BCAD15F,"Residents in Vauban, Germany have given up cars almost completely, with the exception of a $40,000 parking garage fee that over half of the residents have elected not to use. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5aeff139f916,67780BCAD15F,While it may make getting places harder ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+94f5994f82de,67780BCAD15F,the effects of cutting down on car usage are mostly good ones. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1568a669d80a,67780BCAD15F,"First and foremost on this list is global warming. In Europe, cars produce around twelve percent of greenhouse emmissions, while in the US, the number can be as high as fifty percent in cities. This is not good. Global warming is destroying the ice caps and the ozone layer of Earth, leading to a temperature increase that is damaging many enviornments around the world. This, in addition to pollution released by cars and the oil industry, could permanantly cripple our planet ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fc204b6a2cf,67780BCAD15F,Any way that we can cut the effects of global warming should be implemented. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+193793cb5377,67780BCAD15F,"crowded cities benefit in many ways from a lessening of driving. Some cities, like Paris, have already had to enact a partial ban on driving due to a heavy smog layer. Other cities, like Beijing, is even more polluted, and cities in this country suffer as well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e03626f70e5b,67780BCAD15F,"If less people drove, the air would be clearer, as was the case in Paris ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab41eef5ef13,67780BCAD15F,there is less crowding when less people are driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4152e46fd55,67780BCAD15F,"Anyone who has driven through or lived in a large city knows just how bad congestion and traffic jams can be. Less driving would mean less congestion, making it easier for people to get to work, school, or other locations on time. When Paris enacted its driving ban of those with even-numbered liscence plates, congestion went down sixty percent. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2796a9a6c15e,67780BCAD15F,using an alternative to cars can save money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4afa54e8a2e1,67780BCAD15F,"Public transportation could be expensive and, frankly, overcrowded, but it provi     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8c8e394a83b1,67B4E798A5B4,"The Challengen of Exploring Venus,"" The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presemts. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c1508fc4ddfb,67B4E798A5B4,"The author supports this idea. That Venus is actually a planet. in our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the challenging place to examine more closely. Often referred to as Earth's twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in term of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's perputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth; such an eveironment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.
+
+If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar sytem. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some feartures that are analogous to those on Earth The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features sych as valleys mountains, and creaters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit,a crucial consideration given the long time farmes of space travel. The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the optionsfor making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?
+
+The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particulry compelling ideafor sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fary. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperature would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.
+
+Striving to meet the Challenge presented by Venushas value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our tarvels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4480a902a6d1,67D58F9FA53C,"I agree with the principal because that what he said said all students hood at lest participate on a sport,club,or after school activitis. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f4176a1af273,67D58F9FA53C,The principal wants students tp join sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bfc75933769,67D58F9FA53C,maybe because he want some students to get on shape ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+721e72208856,67D58F9FA53C,to atend some after school activitis ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cd74cbe495c,67D58F9FA53C,"for example like a dance club to see how students do and art club to see how students draw and students council. The yearbook like take pictures of all the teams,clubs,or groups the school has. or take photographs of all the teachers of the school like put what they do or what they teach students. School coincuals like take a photographs of them and write on the top what they do there names favoryte thing and others. And sports i do agree with the principal is for students can learn to do team work conumect with others and trying there best to win or at list not loss the game that's how they can learn and it shows the teacher how good there in one thing then the other .And students council i don't now what that is or what it means but i think if like to help keep the school or help janutors, teachers,or the principal with something. And i agree again becaude people or example students need to get on shape learn how working out feels like and then when they grow older they would be like ""wow"" because school is not just learning math sciences sociol studes and laugen arts no,school is a aportuniti to now how life is and how it is ti work hard and trying our best to do or conplet something on life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+173043539291,67D58F9FA53C,"all most every billoner drop of of school and collage to start what they wanted to do and what there dream was the did not stop it they all went for it 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fa761541f68c,67D58F9FA53C,I also disagree because some students need to do some at home ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dbb96e2a9783,67D58F9FA53C,"like help there father or a family member o something of life or have to work in a reasterunt to help there family with bills or other thing like that is why some don't have the time to do any of dos after school activitis and others,or have to take care of a sibiling or a family member and don't have the time to stat for after school activitis for the cause of dos thing that I just said. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82cc607c725a,67D58F9FA53C,"i disagree inone thing again some students just stay after school to finish a test,work,progetor a asy for the teacher or just stay to learn more about what there wanna do of the work or esy is wanna be about ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f092f3752433,67D58F9FA53C,"But in one thing some not all students some hood really stay after like the ones that can't speak english, or the ones who need help on writing on english,or the ones who really need help to read on english . ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5dfc9108cbc5,67D58F9FA53C,Or the ones that want to learn more about a other laenguech they can just stay in the same class that they have the leangucj they want to learn about and just tell the teacher if they can stay after or not no if the teacher is gonna stay after for then they can stay after and learn more of the leanguch they are learning about. The students that are in sports they can just stay after pratising with other students on the soccer filled. And for the student council students can just do what the student council dos because i have no idia what is or what it means . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+954e5e9c9620,67D58F9FA53C,yes some students hood stay after school to participate on one of this activitys the principal has probited for them i can help them on soemthing not like help them alot but just a little for the students know how it is to do something. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c952178cda4d,67F2B24AB779,The use of techonology to read the expressios of students in classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+166bb0f3c0ea,67F2B24AB779,"because it is very helpful for all students when they need to look up something. They can find everything very quickly, and more easy with using the techonoly. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+500fdf2a6e4a,67F2B24AB779,"As the article said ""Imagine being able to detact exactly how other people are felling, even when they are trying to hide their emitions."" We can look up at the techlongy to tell how many percent happy, disgusted, fearful, and angry on the imagine. From the text state, ""She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearfulnpm and 2 percent angry."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d82480abaeb7,67F2B24AB779,"Techonoly today becomes very important, and useful for all of the peoples in the world. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c675f6e8c87b,67F2B24AB779,"They have everything, they have all information for us to look up if we need which very helpfuf our works, and it makes our work become easier. From he text states, ""'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81d2219a184a,67F2B24AB779,"It can also help people relax after a long working, and stressful, or school. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f6b9695e4e32,67F2B24AB779,"We can use it to play a game, watch a movie, or listen to music to help us relax. From the text states, ""the same technology cab make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f99af36c7d8d,67FFAD7BD23C,Should summer projects be designed by students or teachers? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+dc136de0d7f7,67FFAD7BD23C,"I believe that summer projects should be designed by teachers, not students ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9106e1caa6e5,67FFAD7BD23C,students won't know much about the class because they have'nt taken that class. So how could they make a project about a topic they don't know much about? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+631dcabb71f3,67FFAD7BD23C,If students got to design their own projects how would teachers grade them if they are all completely different? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+66ad18bc9ba9,67FFAD7BD23C,Would there be just be one rubic? How would teachers use just that one rubric for completely different projects? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+310b04c478c0,67FFAD7BD23C,How could students make a project about a topic that they don't know much about? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9c9f66bf717,67FFAD7BD23C,"Students would'nt be able to make a summer project because they dont know much about that topic. I believe that if you are going to make a project or an assignment you must know about the topic that you are making the project on. That's why I feel like teachers should make the projects because they know what the topic is about. If the students design the projects it would'nt make sense and would probaly be all over the place and not organized, because they have probaly never designed a project on their own. The project also would'nt have a good structure because the students would'nt know where to even star with the project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eaf38254a6d2,67FFAD7BD23C,How would teachers grade the summer projects when they are completely different? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+431f38cdf367,67FFAD7BD23C,"This is another reason why I believe that teachers should make the projects, because if they let students make their own projects they are going to be completely different, so they can't be graded the same. If students were to design their own projects I feel like it would take way longer to grade then if teachers designed it because each project is unique and different. If the students design the projects then there would be no sturcture to the grading so the teachers wont know how they should grade the project. So if teachers were to design the summer projects you would get a little taste of how the class, assigments, and grading would be like, but if you make your own assignment you won't know what to expect for that class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8312f3100eda,67FFAD7BD23C,"Would there only be one rubric?
+
+If so how would teachers use one rubric for completly different projects? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f6ed9ff1e84b,67FFAD7BD23C,"If teachers designed the summer projects they would only need one rubric because the project would be the same for every student, but if students designed their own projects how would the teacher use only one rubric for different projects because they won't be the same. When teachers assign you a project they give you a rubric on how they are going to grade you, but if students make the project they would'nt be able to get a rubric on how the teacher would grade their project because they are the ones making the project. So if the students made thier own project would they have to make their own rubric aswell? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61d8183d812b,67FFAD7BD23C,"If teachers design the projects they will know how to grade it, they will know what to put on the project, and there would only be one rubric so everyones project would be graded equally. Teachers should also design the summer projects because summer projects are reallly important, it is the first assignment you get in that class. When your teachers assign you your summer project you get a little taste of what the class and assignments will be like. You also get a little taste of what grading would be like aswell, so you know what to expect in the class. These are the reasons why I feel teachers should make the summer projects instead of the students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b69961a02850,681AE0381A53,"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars. Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts in freiburg. Car ownership is ownship is allowed, but there are only two place to park large garge at the edge of development, where a car ower buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home. &0 percent of Vauban's families don't own cars and 57 percent sold car to move here. Vauban, completed in 2006, growin trend in Europe. Many cars has their own unqiue from other cars which people love and feel for it. Passenger cars are reponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emission Europe. Vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined during driving and have been impounded for their action. The end of car culture. Their are a lot of thing happening in car culture happen in technoloy and may improve with cars.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5b3c4ea8325,687134C8A628,Not everyone can affored a car and not everyone ownes a car. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4b5cc4d64c03,687134C8A628,"70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars and  57 percent sold a car to move to Vauban germany. giving up your vehicle isnt pleasent and expeacially if your streets are completly ""car free"". Vauban has ownly two places to park :-large garages or if a car-owner buys a space along with a home. Not everyone thinks the same about cars in Vauban/germany. A mother of two walked down the street and didnt worry about no cars coming her way or her two childrens""im much happier this way"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ece92f3d0f0,687134C8A628,Automobiles are the linchipin of suburbs ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a582dc3b863b,687134C8A628,A huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouses. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c7f67e9b4c5,687134C8A628,"12 percent of greenhouses is responsible do to the passengers seat in a vehicle.50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united states. Vauban completed in 2006 a growing trend in europe to separate suburban life from auto use ""smart planning"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31a61fdddbe5,687134C8A628,There have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser and better for walking now planners are taking the concepts to the suburbs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+faa4602a9e15,687134C8A628,"Vauban have 5,500 residents within the most advanced expirement in low-car suburbuan life. but their basic precepts are being adopted all around the world attepmting to make suburbs more compact to their public transportations. the united states its broad expanses and suburban had long been one of the worlds prime car cultures. protection agency is promoting""car reduced"" communities. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a48c47cd515a,687134C8A628,With all these changes people who stopped car commuting as a result to the recession will find less reasons to resume thir old habbits. a study last year found that driving by young adults decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. americas love affair with vehicles adjusted to the population growth the number of miles driven in the united states in 2005 had dropped steadily. april 2013 numbers of miles driven per person in the united states was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal the the country in 1995 ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47d983993a9a,687134C8A628,In the next few years will be telling the lower emissions and impoved safety.               ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bafdc5d3663,688370E9E6F1,"i think that technology is valuable because you can tell when peoples expressions show they have a emotion like when their eyebrows go up their surprised or if their lips tighten up their angry so that's really cool because you can tell when their mad, sad,happy and thats how people can tell someone is having a bad day or just sad over something really bad so ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0076b0b737a2,688370E9E6F1,thats why i agree cause i always wanted to know what people are feeling. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+38ccbaf897ae,688370E9E6F1,"this evidence i got it from the article saying that thieir having technology where you can tell what people are feeling inside of them or if their mad at you or other stuff so its really cool that they invented this technology cause now people can see peoples emotions and we could never do that.
+
+the whole point of this article is about inventing a technology where everyone can tell what your emotions are and what your body expresses those are your emotions and thats how people know what your are expressing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+acd87d7f4b79,68B6142F4EA9,The use of this advanced technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3ec9be5b632d,68B6142F4EA9,It's interesting to think ahead and create something big that no one can do. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+657524075fa6,68B6142F4EA9,"In paragraph 3, the author says, ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles."" The 44 muscles can tell how the human is feeling, by seeing how the person is moving. For example, when the person is moving really fast, it means that the person might be angry or aggressive. But when a person is moving slow, it means that the person is sad or depressed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb2feb45ad42,68B6142F4EA9,"The author tells in the text, ""We humans perform this same impressive calculation every day."" But comparing a human mind to a computer is different. A human mind can think that the friend is feeling sad, but the computer can have more than just one idea of how the friend feels. The computer can have more than one idea by scanning the face of the person and calculating how the muscles of the face look ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c56b5ea41c15,68B6142F4EA9,It may seem amazing to try to use the technology. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b212ed9a665,68B6142F4EA9,"From the picture of Mona Lisa, when you just look at it, many ideas would pop up in your head from trying to guess how she's feeling and how she looks ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+42ced9fb370d,68B6142F4EA9,"There would be multiple guesses on how her face looks. In paragraph 6, the author says, ""The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do."" Some people might say that she looks mostly happy, a bit disgusted, somewhat fearful, and a little angry. Or they might say all of them and more. We all have different minds, different thoughts, and a different sights at describing a picture. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01d524fa80af,68B6142F4EA9,"Moreover, the article gives us a lot of information of the advanced technological computer that constructs a 3-D model, to scan a human face and tell how the person feels emotionally. It's amazing and interesting to even read about Dr. Huang and Prof. Sebe ,his colleague, are both experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f33ae5bc3a5,68D87C1576F3,The author tells us a lot about Venus in the article. They give us real evidence and facts that we never even knew about. The author tells us how people got to see venus and if it effected them or not. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+21e08a2f9e96,68D87C1576F3,"The author talks about how we need to learn more about this subject. It talks about how Venus is very dangerous , but how we should always learn about it because it is important. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+628d9a5de345,68D87C1576F3,"In the first couple paragraphs the author talks about how Venus is sometimes called the ""Evening star"" and how it is the closest planet to earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00165714192b,68D87C1576F3,It talks about how challenging it is to examine Venus closely ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a731bb8c0d4,68D87C1576F3,When they say this they mean that if people really tried to go and examine venus it would be very dangerous because Venus is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit. No spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours. The last time someone lasted awhile on Venus was three decades ago. The author talks about how it is one of the hardest planets for humans to study. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d65e7217f41,68D87C1576F3,"Venus is covered in almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and the corrosive clouds that are sulfurc acid in Venus's atmosphere. The author decribes this by telling us that this is more extreme than anything humans have ever encountered. Since Venus has high pressure and temperature, it is the hottest planet in our solar system. The author explains this by telling us the temperature and pressure of Venus's atmosphere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6af98bd904b2,68D87C1576F3,"Even though Venus is dangerous to visit, astronomers still plan to visit Venus. Astronomers want to visit Venus still because it is the most earth like planet in our solar system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ea574c21e6b,68D87C1576F3,"In this article they talk about long ago when Venus was covered with forms of life. It says that Venus was probably covered largely with oceans. Venus includes familiar features of valleys, mountains, and craters. NASA is trying to get more humans to study Venus by allowing scientists to float above the fray in a blimp-like vehicle hovering over Venus. It wouldn't be easy for humans but they would survive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c5de6e8a233,68D87C1576F3,"At the end of this article they talk about how humans really need to know about Venus. For humans to really understand how Venus is, scientists would have to get up and personal even though it could be very dangerous. Researchers are working on making machines that would last long enough on Venus without it being dangerous. Some electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber with Venus's surface and they have lasted about three weeks which is very good. We have to try our hardest to meet our challenges even though they are dangerous. We should always try to meet our imagination.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03881100ef11,690D9455E629,"Some schools are requiring students to complete projects over their summer break to promote learning whilst outside of a school setting. However, the schools are debating on whether the projects should be student or teacher designed. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f44175910e0f,690D9455E629,these projects should be designed by the student. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+07301880c940,690D9455E629,It would promote creativity within the students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2fb81cbf0492,690D9455E629,it would allow for the students to make a choice for themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+64303b8db74a,690D9455E629,"It would ensure that the students can express themselves freely while completing the project. The students would be able to unleash their full potential at their own pace. This would give the student more incentive to complete the project knowing that they have the chance to show they can really do. Also it would give the teacher a good look at what their student is capable of outside of a classroom 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7c2497a3f38,690D9455E629,"It would help them become more independent and self reliant. The students already have to do what the teacher says during the school year, so this would make for a great chance for them to do what they need to on their own time. It would also teach them to be responsible for themselves and for their own work. For example, if the student understands that they are no longer in a classroom setting where the teacher explains everything to them, they will conclude they must rely on themselves to complete the task at hand. Which would lead to more independence rather than depending on the teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e5f4b9ce4950,690D9455E629,"if the project was designed by the teacher it would b a more stable and set curriculum. The teacher knows exactly what they are looking for, so for the project to be designed by a teacher would allow for the project to be more organized. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+990e8bb366a2,690D9455E629,"On the other hand, it would take away the idea of creativity and the chance to express ones self had the project been student designed. Which would lead to less effort being put into the projects. If the students are given the chance to do as they please freely they can put more time and effort into it. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+eea56fcb66bd,690D9455E629,Schools allowing for these summer projects to be created by the students would be greatly beneficial. It gives the students a chance to be as creative as they please and express themselves openly. It also is a good opportunity to teach them the importance of self reliance and how to take responsibility. These are all valuable skills that are going to be needed by the students during a later time in life. It is good to get these skills in early so that the students will understand how to use them later when it is important. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e8471fd84315,693C3112ED21,"Since the invention of the first automobiles, negative impacts such as greenhouse gases, and other enviromental effects have plauged the world in a very short amount of time. Some people are taking action, like in certain cities such as Vauban Germany, paris and Colombia, by taking efforts to reduce the use of cars for transportation. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c8e2f11b7140,693C3112ED21,"Ultimatly, as people begin the shift from autombile transport; certain economic, enviromental, and societal advantages will benifit the world we live in today. ",Position,Effective,,,
+323c4c8544d2,693C3112ED21,"In Vauban germany, residents of the town are starting to take efforts in the first of ""car-free"" societies. To most people this idea could seem unpractical, but car free living can be very benefitial, to the enviroment and daily life. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+18ef68ed414c,693C3112ED21,"For instance, people in Vauban claim that they feel very tense when they own, and have to drive a car to and from places that they have to work. The layout of these cities like vauban, are unique because they are very dense, unlike the urban and suburban towns of america. This makes walking and biking a more easy method of transportation without having the negative effects of green house gases. In Bogota Colombia, residents are also realizing the the benefits that come with no cars, in wich they have a car- free day that spawns a whole new way of life. The new methods of transportation then become centered around bikes, walking, and other methods of non poluting trasnportation. This also leads to a benefit on the economy, by having 118 miles of bicycle paths built, new walking paths, resturaunts, and shopping districts being created. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+39a7bcd3a065,693C3112ED21,"In Paris, near-records pollution caused by smog, forced city leaders to take action, banning all cars in a 2 day period; and fining all violators of this new ban. This limited congestion in the capital by 60%. Free public transit was also issued for the exception of the ban, even though almost 4000 drivers were fined and some had their cars impound; which certainly helped the number of pollutants on the streets. The smog cleared enough on monday, to where all odd numbered plates were free of the ban on tuesday. These notacable enviromental effects were so substantial in such a short amount of time, that it could spawn a whole new wave of car banning cities to help thier local enviroment ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8caf006a596b,693C3112ED21,"If every city was based around this ideal, it would help their local enviroment, ultimatly helping their economic industries. Globally, this would make a huge change in the world wide market and decrease greenhouse gases. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b264e7fc31b3,693C3112ED21,"The United States is also seeing a change in the amount of people that are buying fewer cars and driving less. These kinds of trends will ultimatly benefit the society if continued, by limiting carbon emissions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b44c74cd8ac8,693C3112ED21,"Although this would hurt the car industry, it would help other parts of the economy like agriculture and ocean based fishing, by helping these ecosystems to produce more effectivly. Places like New York also have bike-sharing programs, which would have a impact on people's health too. Most people do not realize the postitive effects that daily exercise can have upon yourself. For example; if every person in New york walked to where they work every morning; new york would experiance a wave of healthy, happy, individuals. Even large car companies like ford are stating that pedestrain, bicycle, and public trasprotation save time, lower emissions and improve safety. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f9b7fde61a74,693C3112ED21,"Overall, benifits of reducing car transportation is too great to be ignored. It is a step in the right direction that people are taking action and rising up for the greater good of their local towns and spreading awareness by these actions. Our future could go either way, we can continue on this path and do whats right for the enviroment, or neglect the earth we live on and face the consequences.                              ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fa51456363bf,698E89BCF1FD,I personally disagree with you. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+22c4b5d1f1a5,698E89BCF1FD,some students may already have an a extracurricular activity outside of school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09c37bb7d8f2,698E89BCF1FD,many of the students parents may not have the money to pay for any extracurricular activity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5fce75ab302,698E89BCF1FD,"For one, many students often already have extracurricular activities outside of school that they love to do. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d8f93961896,698E89BCF1FD,"Such as, playing baseball, football, basketball, dancing, and other activities.
+
+So, if all the students have to participate in extracurricular activities after school.
+
+Many students won't be able to do the activities they love during outside of school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae4773fbebca,698E89BCF1FD,"most importantly, some students parents may not have the money to provide to the school for the extracurricular activities. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bce4f7afcc7,698E89BCF1FD,"Most of the time when you are playing a sport you have to pay for your jersey, cleats, and other things you need to play that sport, and also the dues that come with playing that sport.
+
+But first, you got to consider that many parents are probably struggling with paying the bills, putting clothes on their child back or children, paying for food, and other things that children need. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b26918422f73,698E89BCF1FD,"I hope that you put into consideration that before just saying that every student have to do an extracurricular activity after school.
+
+Be sure that every student have everything they need for that activity, everything is alright at home, and other things that will help the student do that extracurricular activity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fe2684b2032d,69A1A0E6B176,"My principal has decided that all students are required to participate in at least one extracurricular activity, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+65a49cb35f2c,69A1A0E6B176,I think its a great Idea! Extracurricular activities are actually a great thing for students to get involved in for many reasons ,Position,Effective,,,
+5b87dcbf1d93,69A1A0E6B176,Requiring all students to do extracurricular activities results in students either getting more exercise or using their brain more depending on what they choose ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b2a540d433fb,69A1A0E6B176,and it will make them more likely to get into college ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b526538fa579,69A1A0E6B176,Students who were skeptical of joining anything extracurricular will finally understand what its like to be a part of something like that and I think most of them will enjoy it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+56bd403e3ccc,69A1A0E6B176,"Students engaging in activities that require a lot of physical activity such as sports, will be more physically fit and most likely healthier than those who do not. If someone decides they want to sign up for yearbook or student council, they will have the opportunity to greatly improve their problem solving skills ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2e49dd93f31e,69A1A0E6B176,. Anyone having engaged in either of these will understand what its like to work with a group of people to work together to achieve a common goal ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9d6073ac3244,69A1A0E6B176,"This will allow students to better understand how to exist in the real world and how to work at their future jobs. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4346918eeabe,69A1A0E6B176,Anyone who does an extracurricular activity and in this case everyone going to my school will have a better chance of going to college ,Claim,Effective,,,
+581970831daf,69A1A0E6B176,"Colleges see if and what you have done in terms of extracurricular stuff, because they don't want someone who they think will do the bare minimum and barely get through. Colleges care about their image. So as far as the colleges are concerned good students equals good looks and good looks equals more demand college which equals more money. Part of that image is sports, in fact if you are good enough at a specific sport so much that they want you to be on their team they will pay for you to go to their college, this is called a scholarship. The better the students a college gets the more attractive it looks, the more students my high school sends to college the more attractive my high school looks and the students have a higher chance to go to college, its a win, win, win! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+72a8b7ffa871,69A1A0E6B176,"I feel that it is important in high school to be a part of something like a sport, or yearbook, or student council. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+09115d924866,69A1A0E6B176,"The sense of community and common interest in a large group of people can really make you feel at home and be a nice thing to look forward to after a long day of school, even if it might be taxing physically or mentally. In anything extracurricular everyone knows everyone, they're all friends united by a common passion and a common goal. This builds strong compromising skills and cooperative skills. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b94ebe6bc1e1,69A1A0E6B176,"The principles decision makes kids do something that they will most likely actually really enjoy, something that will very much assist them in getting into college, and something that will allow students to understand how to survive in the real world. It will also benefit my high school and any college any current student at my school goes to in the future. In conclusion, the decision to make all students required to do an extracurricular activity was a fantastic one. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8552d5465b0c,6A273D6F0816,"It's the last day of school, and students are sweating bullets eager for the clock to kick off their summer vacation when the hour-hand strikes two. Suddenly, collective groans echo throughout the entire school when an english teacher hands out a summer reading project. Many schools require students to complete some kind of assignment during their summer break because the school boards believe that it will ensure continued learning. Summer assignments usually ask that students read a book over the summer and fill out some type of summary or chart. Many students have great disdain for summer projects because they can act as a looming annoyance waiting to be accomplished. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c4d90ca68a1d,6A273D6F0816,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e4e1e1fc4352,6A273D6F0816,"it gives students the ability to work at their own pace, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+47c5d3290112,6A273D6F0816,promotes interest ,Claim,Effective,,,
+42119f85acc1,6A273D6F0816,prevents students from copying eachother ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ae1215acf88a,6A273D6F0816,Allowing students to design their own summer project allows them to work at their own pace. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a689f31073a2,6A273D6F0816,"Schools usually don't account for what home or family students go back to during the summer. A student might go back to a family with elderly or children they have to take care of thus filling up their schedule. Schools also don't account for students who have jobs during the summer. If a teacher assigns a project that consists of several pages of charts, summaries, or questions to fill out, it can slam a ton of stress on students going home to a busy schedule. Giving students the ability to design their own projects benefits students who will be busy over summer break because they can reserve whatever time they can scrap up for making a project that makes their life easier. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8eb04621eba9,6A273D6F0816,"Although not encouraged, this freedom also gives students who procrastinate the ability to make their sleepless night completing said project the day before school starts less stressful ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a2d21ebf9af9,6A273D6F0816,"Since every student is different, every student benefits with the power to work at their own pace. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0eec5e2b0535,6A273D6F0816,Giving students the freedom to design their own summer project also promotes interest in the assignment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e1d7777a4acf,6A273D6F0816,"For typical summer projects like reading a book, students are usually given a reading list of books and they're required to read one of the books on the list. The lists arguably always consist of books that students find boring or repetitive when they go over topics they've already studied in the past. Students won't be interested in works they find boring or repetitive so when they're making a project off of it, words, reasoning, and justification will seem empty and made up on the spot. If students are allowed to pick any book they'd like to read over the summer and make an assignment off of it, their interest and passion might shine through in their interpretation of the material. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8a6c602dad24,6A273D6F0816,Some might say that assignments students make up could be counterproductive since they might not have anything to do with themes or topics that will be learned in the coming school year. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+110e7107751e,6A273D6F0816,"On the other hand, teachers can simply just note as a minor requirement that students must make one quick connection from their project to any theme that will be studied in the school year. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+09b37be58d74,6A273D6F0816,Letting students design their own summer projects also prevents them from copying one another. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a8299377d1c6,6A273D6F0816,"One tactic that students will typically use with summer projects like reading a book of their choice and filling out the same chart is to read the same book as a friend and then copy each other answers when they have to turn the project in. If students design their own project, they'll have to show some individuality and creativity on the due date. Teachers will have an easier time telling when students copy each other because if done right, no student should have created the same project. If two students are caught clearly copying off each other on a project meant for individuality, they can be punished accordingly. Everyone will turn something different in at least some way when they aren't spoon fed a big packet and instead get to create their own packet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+443d67140ccc,6A273D6F0816,"Overall, both students and teachers benefit when students are the ones who make the summer project because students work at their own pace, create something they might be interested in, and display their individuality in learning more accurately. Students who procrastinate, have jobs, or take care of family over the summer will heave a sigh of relief. Students will be grateful they'll have a more creative, individual project to complete when they're bored during the summer and not a big, scary one that's due the day they get back to school. Less groans will echo throughout schools when students hear that they have more freedom in an assignment given for what's supposed to be a break.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+80283d1cb88b,6A2F708CAA8B,"The use of phones and cars serve many purposes such as communicating with others, playing games, and using the many different internet based features. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c9fbba419792,6A2F708CAA8B,"We use cars as a means of travel, others to modify and race, and make them look cool ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+94d820eaa0f4,6A2F708CAA8B,In every day jobs like firefighters and police use cars to patrol neighborhoods and to travel to the location they are called to. For delivery like packages and food we use cars and phones for most of the things we do in modern society ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5774025f51a,6A2F708CAA8B,But get in some accidents or cause accidents with cars and we get hurt because of these accidents physically and financially ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+95d2c47f78a3,6A2F708CAA8B,but they can be avoided taking precautions like insurance and driving safe and keep your car maintenance high or good ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d33616df8fd1,6A2F708CAA8B,"The death toll for 2018 is 18,720 and an additional 2.1 million people who have sustained serious injuries due to car accidents in the first six months of 2018. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+81056062f5c7,6A2F708CAA8B,Texting and driving should not be aloud ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3b1df32d7a45,6A2F708CAA8B,it can kill people and its bad that it happens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9add634f418,6A2F708CAA8B,The laws and punishment the law should be to not be on your cell phone while driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3064acb7d0a,6A2F708CAA8B,or if you're are on it make sure it's on speaker phone or have somebody text on your phone to whoever. The punishment should be a fine or community service but no serious punishment because it was an accident . But if it was on purpose then should have jail time why because it was done intentionally and they knew exactly what they were doing . It's a accident most of the time but the point is that it happens which we can't prevent car accidents but we can decrease them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d996bd896408,6A2F708CAA8B,And for coverage for your car like insurance cost sometimes a lot of money it really depends on the insurance company and the benefits from that company ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6f96abf5786,6A2F708CAA8B,but it's worth it and don't text and drive it may cost you a lot of money or your life ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6fc80356e243,6A2F708CAA8B,it's important to keep your eyes on the road at all times and to pay attention from crashing or getting crashed into .We have highway patrol and police with speeding guns to prevent crashes people cause by speeding or not paying attention . We also have cameras to catch these things that cause accidents and they work most of the time but doesn't reduce accidents . And checkpoints for people who are under the influence and who are intoxicated and who drunk driving ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f98fbe2c8ca,6A2F708CAA8B,These are some fact to provide evidence that texting and driving is dangerous and has killed people and some things that prevent it .       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bd7b3e6a614c,6A49432C3001,"Venus one of the hottest place I wouldn't recomand going there too study, it's too dangerous to go study at venus , you could get stuck there or something. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d60af0fcd94e,6A49432C3001,"The planet surface temperatures is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what our own planet. The percent of carbon dioxide is 97 percent. People study about venus, how is and how hot it is and if there is people/animals living there, but they know it's not easy conditions but servivable for humans ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db5f828f8242,6A49432C3001,"Comparison systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8c133033fd5c,6A49432C3001,Exploring venus is dangorus because if NASA is planning someone too venus wouldn't be a good idea is better sending them in a group but sending someone alone is not a good idea ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6fc3861cb135,6A49432C3001,"Venus is the closest planet to Earth terms of density and size and occasionally the closet in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars and the other planetary neighbor orbit the sun at different speeds. The differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars and other times to venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aee037a9b62e,6A49432C3001,"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study , despite it's proximity to us ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+81ac3b34feba,6A6651ADD38C,I have some very good reasons for why I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c1792d4a818,6A6651ADD38C,What you need to know about how to be a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c0070635d7d4,6A6651ADD38C,"I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. I think that you should join it because I love it, I love working with the animals; I have a feeling you would too. It is a once in a lifetime opportunity, you can't pass it up. You will also get to go sightseeing in a lot of cool, different places. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8522f7e550f9,6A6651ADD38C,"When I first got out of highschool, I did not think that I would be working two part-time jobs. Or be so busy all of the sudden, the jobs were so boring, it was time for a change.
+
+Then my friend Don Reist invited me to go to Eurpoe on a cattle boat. I couldn't deny it; this was a once in a lifetime opportunity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fff2f039eaa3,6A6651ADD38C,I think that you will love the experince with the animals and nature. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7af4025c3f93,6A6651ADD38C,"But this job can also be very dangerous, I cracked my ribs and couldn't work for a couple of weeks because I fell off a slippery ladder. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e9ff8973e25,6A6651ADD38C,"You might need a love for animals and nature, and experince with working on a farm; but you also need to be very brave and be ready for anything that comes your way. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+312c99db20cf,6A6651ADD38C,These are plenty of reasons why I think that you should be a Seagoing Cowboy. There are also reasons why I became a Seagoing Cowboy and what you need to know to be one. Please take my advice and try out the program. I think you will love being able to see cool stuff in different countries and working with the animals. Do not forget to be ready for anything that comes your way while you are on that boat. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4452c35269f5,6A97E65BBE95,"This article is talking about the the planetary neighbors of the Earth. on this article explains how others planets move around the sun and the earth,how are thir differences between the speed of this planets. Also explains why the humans never visit this planets, and how are their enviorment. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0ae0794c0782,6A97E65BBE95,"Venus, somethimes called the ""Evenig Star"" is the closest planet to Earth. this planets have differents such as, the size between their, the speed that they move around the sun, this speed mean tht sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.
+
+The big question here is, why humans never visited this planets in more l tha three decades. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, no since no spacecraft survived the landing for more that a few hours. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planet's surface temperatures average oner 800 degrees Fathrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Also notable, Venus has the hottest sufrace temperature of any planet of solar system, wheather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, and powerful earthquakes.
+
+The National Aeronautics Space Administration (NASA) has one particulary idea for sending humans to study Venus, Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up andout of their way, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. No easy conditions, but survivable for humans.
+
+However, Venus can provide only limited insinght on ground conditions because most forms on light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a0b7bac44e83,6A97E65BBE95,"For now humans can't go to explore others planes as Venus, but I think with the step of the time, humans are going to envolving more on their technologies. Something that everyone know clearly, both planets as Mars and Venus have a lot of differences between our planet. Can humans can go to others planes in next close years? 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+41b9e407160b,6AAA584CCF70,"to imform fellow citizens about the advantage of limited car usage.'' as a result,70 percernt of vaubans families do not own car and 57 percent sold a car to move here''.''Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs where middle- families from chicago to shanghai tend to make their home''.and '' passenger car are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe. and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive area in the united state''. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5123d857fae6,6AAA584CCF70,"while there have been effort in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking, planners are now taking the concept to the suburbs. vauban,home to 5,500 resident within a rectangular square mile,may be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life'' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c610cb830ee0,6AAA584CCF70,there are some county and city tht have higher cost of the gasoline and some county and city have lower cost but evrything it different in all the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24b4e96b2d79,6AAA584CCF70,"paris typically has more smog than other european capital.''president obama's ambitious goal to curb the united state greendhouse gas emissiom, unveiled las week,will get a fortuitous ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d5bbb8bc52e,6AAA584CCF70,that what i think advantage of limited car like i said every city and county are different and have different cost.    ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b63a96da8cf0,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"A student's freedom from the limitations of the classroom's necessary rules during the summer provides new opportunities for them to learn in dynamic ways. While, in the classroom, a teacher's control of a regulated learning program is unavoidable in order to teach such a broad audience in such a short time, there are no such factors outside the classroom. The variable shape of a student's summer project provides a unique opportunity for the student's specific educational needs to be accounted for - which a teacher-designed project wouldn't be able to take advantage of. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+024f529613ed,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"Education during the summer should be student-designed, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7eca12e5ef03,6AE4BFE2E5CF,the student can pander to their learning style and interest ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f9616fd4125,6AE4BFE2E5CF,it can reinvigorate the student with a passion for learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a5e05ff4f5e8,6AE4BFE2E5CF,it instills a certain independence from adult figures that will be necessary later in life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+705d11689c5f,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"Students learn in many different ways. Psychological studies have shown that there are different types of learning, from spacial to audio to visual, and students learn better in some ways than others. A rising awareness of mental health has also led to the understanding that brains process information in different ways, so students with autism or ADHD don't get the same results from the conventional classroom practices. Student-designed summer projects would be able to take all these different specifications into account when structuring the project, so visual learners could visit exhibitions while attention deficient kids could apply whatever technique they need to help them study (listening to music for some, a totally still room for others) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+feff49a42385,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"The dynamic nature of a student-designed project would be an advantage to the kids who need to learn in a different way from the regulated, cookie-cutter methods that teachers use. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3f428303c7bf,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"As well, a student-designed project could angle more in the direction of what the student wants to learn about. Students are forced to spend hours of a day paying attention to subject matters that they don't care for in order to get a generalized education. However, the point of a summer project is education itself, not education towards the goal of a degree. Students would be able to design a project that deepens their interest in a topic, broadens their knowledge in a niche industry. Education would feel more like a hobby than a chore if a student could account for what they learn and how they want to learn it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+edb3f97102d4,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"A student-designed summer project would be exciting for students, because the agency over their education would allow them to create highly specified and perfect learning courses for themselves ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b06308b682de,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"Going through a program that teaches them in a way that they both understand and enjoy would be exciting and possibly life changing. The modern school system is the most monstrous source of stress on the childhood and adolescent mind. Even though learning should be acknowledged as a privilege, wonder, and necessity, it becomes a burden to students. Between the forced socialization of the classroom environment, administrations that care more for policy than the experience of the individual, a constantly building workload, and a set of rules and grades that are constantly judging and disciplining behavior, schooling becomes nightmarish for students. The poor environment weighs so heavily on the minds of children that they often develop mental illnesses or complexes, and, in extreme cases, are driven to suicide over poor grades (which, in the grand scheme of life, should be menial). Student-designed summer projects would be a way to show students that learning can be a growing and nurturing experience, instead of a murderous one. That change in outlook in the mind of a student could make all the difference in that student's optimism, well being, and quality of life for the rest of their schooling career. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a719093ad329,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"One of the main focuses of school is to prepare a student for adulthood. While school accomplishes that in many ways, it fails to teach students how to truly act independently, because their lives are always in some way being influenced by adults that hold real power. A student-designed summer project would fill this void of education, however, because it encourages students to make choices for themselves and then to carry through with those choices in order to make them a reality. Placing the responsibility of their own education on a student would encourage them to think critically and organizationally in order to create and then implement a strategy. The limitless possibilities of the project, because the design is given over to the student, would teach them how to narrow down vague concepts into specific plans. Even arranging for certain resources to be supplied, depending on the project, would show the student how to control moving parts - whether that manifests in asking their mother to buy eggs from the grocery store or in biking to the library to check out the necessary reading materials. Students are rarely prepared for the autonomy of college and the time-managing aspects of adulthood, because they're used to their parents or teachers doing things for them ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c03c6010ea4e,6AE4BFE2E5CF,Forcing a student to design a project that they then have to complete would be an introduction into the decision making of adulthood. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4da31fbb2dc2,6AE4BFE2E5CF,"A student-designed summer project would help students grow, because they could change their views on the operations of education in the span of a few months. They would grow to be stronger learners, more persistent observers, and more assertive leaders. Since life is really a process of learning--whether that means learning skills, academics, or something else entirely--an easy relationship with the concept of learning is the most valuable thing for a person to develop. Student-designed projects are an easy opportunity to encourage and teach that kind of relationship, and students would develop an outlook on learning that would improve the way they interact with the world for the rest of their lives.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+80532307e6c5,6B030715E953,Students shouldn't need to participate in extracurricular. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+822969a0ac39,6B030715E953,Students may need to take care of family members right after they leave school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b5dafbe35dc8,6B030715E953,Most students get loads of homework or assignments to finish between the week. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6a928f2ac4f6,6B030715E953,"Students may not like the after school activities, or they would rather go home. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffb805c335ed,6B030715E953,With the students responsibilities and feelings they don't need to participate in extracurricular. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+992623aba01d,6B030715E953,Students needed at home would never be able to participate in the activities after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+189776330858,6B030715E953,"Students sometimes at home need to become the parent for their younger siblings. This carries on the responsibility to feed and watch the child. The student may also need to pick up their younger siblings at the bus stop or daycare, being late to either of those would lead to a bigger problem. Having a parent come home late would push the responsibility to make sure the students sibling is put to bed at the right time. It might take hours for smaller children to sleep, this can badly effect the students sleep. The students responsibilities lead them to have no time for after school activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ade38b0793e,6B030715E953,"With the students work load teachers give them, they wouldn't be able to have time for extracurricular ",Claim,Effective,,,
+db46e2bc49d3,6B030715E953,Teachers like to assign lots of homework and assignments to students. This leads to the student spending their time doing work. Students also take the responsibility to make sure its all due before or the day of. This happens to force the student to keep their minds on school work instead of activities. After school activities would just be a handful between homework and assignments. Having a large handful can lead to stress. With the student having no time left extra curriculum would be out of the question. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d2ba1f3b7674,6B030715E953,Most students end up having a long day at school. This can effect on how the student feels by the end of the day. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6021f0741d12,6B030715E953,"Students would rather go home and relax then to do an activity right after a long day. After school activities would ruin the students motivation to do anything. Students need a break from school. The perfect time for that would be after school hours. Allowing the student to have a time for themselves would let their brain relax and letting their body refresh. Students should allow themselves to have breaks after school, this wouldn't happen if students had to do a extracurricular. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d8fe2328d6f5,6B030715E953,"In conclusion students don't have to do a extracurricular.
+
+With the work load and responsibilities students carry, extra curriculum would become a burden to the students. Students are more worried about the responsibilities they have and their feelings. Therefore, letting students choose what they want to do after school would be a better outcome for the students and school.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c90b9b6523f7,6B34AE0F8DBF,"In the passage, The Challenge of Exploring Venus, there is a passage explaining what Venus looks while they send machines to discovers the planet. The author tries to explain to us what kind of challenges they have found while exploring Venus ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cc2cefefd2ef,6B34AE0F8DBF,The point of view that the author see is that Venus is a worthly pursuit despiting the dangers on it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cf8497b2b0c6,6B34AE0F8DBF,"Each passage has its own main part about Venus, however, it will tallk about the challenge that are face in Venus ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+69fc2be0b2b2,6B34AE0F8DBF,In this parts of the article the author has the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despiting the dangers and he explains his reasoning with the context that is left behind this article ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea4ae3888e82,6B34AE0F8DBF,"The passage tells us about why its worthy to pursuit it, in passage 8 it says, ""striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."" The meaning of this part of the passage is telling us how people just think about how or what it is like to explore Venus. NASA has been trying to make inventions to help them go to Venus an have a closer look."" NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3adaeecd6d8,6B34AE0F8DBF,"Althouth people want to go and explore Venus, there are some challenges that Venus provides for people ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47df8cfd1ee3,6B34AE0F8DBF,"The dangers in this article tells us in passage 1 "" While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely."" its hard for us to explore something from far away but during the attemptes we still can get close to Venus. In the passage it says, ""A lot of spacecraft haven't survived the landing in a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" These are some reason why we can not reach Venus as worthly it is, it is challenging to explore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77769a42b17c,6B34AE0F8DBF,"The author does not care what kind of dangers there is because he thinks Venus is a planet that is worth to study. As he tries to get a closer look at. NASA has been also trying to help make machines and new inventions that are safe for people to go up and for themselves. Although the challenges that they have read, seen, or have heard kept stopping them from figuring out how to get closer to Venus. However, they did not give up because they kept looking for other ways to explore Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c31c129280df,6B4F37D30E7C,"
+venus is a big planet, sometimes is called ""evening star"", is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. In our solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+27c63c57c0d1,6B4F37D30E7C,"Venus is a secons planet with more similarity in our solar system, in terms of density an size and occasionally in distance. venus is a big planet for to go investigate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+76d4f93d7cf4,6B4F37D30E7C,"The atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus.
+
+on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greather than waht we experience on our own planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+592cb10e4a8d,6B4F37D30E7C,These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+871c88230c35,6B4F37D30E7C,"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b106db138e65,6B4F37D30E7C,NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aae8d6b1b37b,6B4F37D30E7C,"for example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surfaces and have lasted for three weeks i such conditions. Another project is use old technology called mechanical computers. Just imagine exposing a cellphone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1beb223c6ccb,6B4F37D30E7C,"
+If you think is good if the NASA want search information about Venus, and end venus is a planet with more silmilarity to the Earth, i think is good but with the genocide atmosphere is so hard if we try live on Venus. maybe just how are the atmosphere or search life in other planets but for live on venus is a big problem. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d3e9abd21801,6B4F37D30E7C,"
+just live one day or less, or the human body change or some people born different the others. these conditions are not for a human, the human be killed in seconds.
+
+is a big challenge live is this planet, the temperatures are not for humans the clouds are acid and we don't know if this planet has other lifes. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e27b4a36a7ba,6B61F68D4B21,Using Facial Action Codying System (FACS) to read students emotions could be a good thing. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+acb5c966b3a6,6B61F68D4B21,"It could allow teachers, staff, and other students to know how a students is feeling ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+02e463312c5a,6B61F68D4B21,"If you know they are feeling sad, you could change something to make them feel happy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9d7b2b7d7b3,6B61F68D4B21,These things could make the student more willing to learn and be more excited about school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4afdc39557e3,6B61F68D4B21,"If you were to recognize how someone was feeling, think about how much that could benefit you and the person feeling that way. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa791c009506,6B61F68D4B21,"If you were to notice a student feeling sad or lonely, you find out the problem and solve it. If a student was mad or upset, you could fix that too. This might create less violence in schools and higher school attendence rates. It could prevent fights and arguements between teachers and students. It could also prevent bullying ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe77cbd7de3c,6B61F68D4B21,"If a student is feeling sad, lonely, or depressed, teachers could recognize that and fix the problem before anything happened or got worse. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebb461e5b19e,6B61F68D4B21,"This can also make school couselors better at their jobs and make their jobs easier. If couselor knew how you were feeling, they could get you the help you needed faster then when they had to figure out exactly how you were feeling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e6fa3f921fc,6B61F68D4B21,"The Facial Action Codying System (FACS) can be a good thing. It could solve so many problems inside and outside of schools. It can show when you're happy, surprised, disgusted, afraid, sad, and angry. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e249b47f0581,6B648AFC9FCF,Feelings and emotions are ways we show people how we act and what we are feeling at that moment. Only we know what we are feeling at times or even at that moment. Our emotions determine who we are and what we show from the expressions from our face. Its hard to determine what a person is thinking and what they are feeling at any moment of time. I think it is time though because someone has found a way to determine someone's emotions. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+453395fc8278,6B648AFC9FCF,Finally someone has found a way to determine someone's feelings and emtions with a simple computer program ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+466ccf3d9a31,6B648AFC9FCF,The person who worked and worked to show us this is Dr. Huang from Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans to communicate with computers. This idea for trying to communicate with computers brought up the idea of the feelings and emotions of a human being. They use simple calculations of the facial movements that are used to determine your feelings and emotions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a083ae3d14b,6B648AFC9FCF,They begin the process with a 3-D process of the face and control every muscle on the face to mimic the emotions and feelings of a human being and that is amzing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d273fffc7485,6B648AFC9FCF,"The movements of the face is called a ""action unit"". Dr. huang relies on a psychologist to determine the emotions of that scan and to give six emotions that will determine every humans feelings within those six basic emotions. I think that these basic emotins are basically all the emotions any human uses for every day life. Thats why Dr. Paul Eckman picked them because them are the most common and most used emotions ever. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0920a65087af,6B648AFC9FCF,In paragraph three is the way humans move their muscles on their face to show emotions. Facial expressions are the one way humans can determine how someone is doing or feeling at that moment of time. In paragraph four they talk about how the program can even show that facial expressions of how Mona Lisa was feeling or what emotions she had of the time of the painting. The fact that we perform the same impressive calculation of determining a person's feelings just by looking at them is a perfect way for them to study and perfect the programs way to scanning emotions. The demonstractions of each scan are amazing at showing what the program and the computer can really do at a time where technology is at it's prime. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ae330d34815,6B648AFC9FCF,I feel like the computer and the humans who are trying to communicate with them are a great way to show feelings and emotions through talking. This program is gonna change the world of technology and the world of emotions for the better of the country and it's people. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5f94d7e88c83,6B648AFC9FCF,I think that what they are doing is a very constructive way of showing that you can find ways to determine a person's well being and their happiness. This program should be kept going at it's fullest for lots of years and should get to a point where it even helps out the crime system. As a last thought the program has to perfect this to get to maximum use of what should be used to help determine these feelins and emotions for the better. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cbb521728b25,6BF54A9F8383,Should people use their phones while driving? Well 1 out of every 4 car accidents in the United States is caused by texting and driving. People are so distracted by their phones they forget about their own safety at risk while driving. While you're driving you should be more focused on the road and your surrounds more than a Facebook notification. It's not only teens that do this adults as well use their phones while driving. It is one of the leading reasons of car accidents today. Not only are you putting yourself at risk but you're putting others in risk as well. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+91b063047375,6BF54A9F8383,So should you use your phones while driving I think not. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6c9bc23b7be1,6BF54A9F8383,Texting and driving is one of the most dangerous forms of distracted driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6c83b9e6b84,6BF54A9F8383,"In fact, the average text sent or read in a car takes a driver's eyes off the road for 5 seconds. This is more than enough time to get in a life-altering accident. Now in the matter of 5 seconds of looking at your phone you can cause yourself to getting in a really bad accident. Now if you get caught texting or using your phone while driving you can get in some trouble. Violation of the law is a misdemeanor, punishable by a fine of $25 for a first offense, $50 for a second offense, and $75 for a third offense. The penalty for a first offense for violating the texting law is a fine of $20 to $400 and up to four points on the driving record of the offender. So are you sure you willing to pay the fine or do the time for texting while driving. It really isn't worth it you can wait until you get to your destination. There more things important than your phone while you're driving like the road than an Instagram notification. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2ea889e7a022,6BF54A9F8383,"Using your phone while driving doesn't only put the driver at risk, but also everyone else on the road. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+93c7f207eeb9,6BF54A9F8383,"Take for example the many young students who have died while driving because they were texting. Looking around while driving, you can see people distracted by their cell phones. These people are not only teenagers but also adults. The shocking truth is that texting while driving increases the chances of crashing by over 23 times normal driving. People have a longer response time when they text. Then the passengers may not be looking at the road because they may be on their phones. On average, an accident happens within two to three seconds when the driver is texting. So if you do get into an accident you could do major damages to another person car or worse you could cause severe health damage to the other person that was in the other vehicle. Using a cell phone while driving caused an estimated 1.5 million car accidents in the U.S. in 2018 according to the National Safety Council. The U.S. Department of Transportation reported that cell phone use while driving kills 3-000 to 6,000 people every year including the other that got was in the accident because of the bad driver. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+726c9edb8482,6BF54A9F8383,There are many reason on why texting while driving is very useful ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f8b4e55d4c08,6BF54A9F8383,"Here's seven reasons to stop using your phone and driving it puts innocent lives at risk, it puts your life at risk, it is comparable to, if not worse than, driving under the influence ,you are more likely to crash, it's very easy to simply pull over, you are setting a bad example for children and it is often illegal. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6992f7b9e722,6BF54A9F8383,"The reasons why cell phones should not be used while driving are fairly obvious, because even a two-second distraction - taking your eyes off the road to pick up your phone and see who's calling you for example- increases your risk of crashing. As long as their use does not distract you from focusing on the road and you do not have to touch the phone. Using your phone when your car is stationary at traffic lights or in congested traffic. Illegal. When the engine is running and you are in control of the car, it is illegal to touch your phone. Now if you were a passenger in a car would you want the driver to be using their phone while driving? No so think when you're driving and you have the urge to look at your phone think of what could happen if you take your eyes of the road or how you would feel if someone on their phone while driving. Please don't text while drive or get on your phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da1c409a9b0b,6BF54A9F8383,So now should people should you use your phone while driving? Think of what could happen while doing such a thing like checking your phone. It isn't worth it at all to look at that notification at all. You can save yourself from getting into an accident. You can save yourself from potentially killing someone for just looking away for 2 seconds. So please don't use your phone while driving please and thank you. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+074202fae31b,6BFE57AA416B,"In the summer, student's minds are in the clouds, and they often forget that they have a summer school project to work on. Of course, this is always a bummer to have, and when students have to start on a project that the teacher has designed for them, it's even worse. Students are more likely to procrastinate, work on the project last minute, and have the mindset of thinking that the project that they have to work on is dumb. The lack of motivation and creativity will end up of making the project not as bright, and rather dull looking, as they struggle working on the project in the summer. However, if a student is able to design their own project, they would be able to put more effort into completing the project and be more creative on how they will complete the project. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ff4280d7f73a,6BFE57AA416B,A student should be able to design their own project ,Position,Effective,,,
+c61cb77fa555,6BFE57AA416B,"it helps them feel more motivated, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+39b58fd02695,6BFE57AA416B,"be more creative, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+699cc1158bf5,6BFE57AA416B,"they can take the information that they are using from the project and actually learn from it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d0c586d75a5,6BFE57AA416B,"As a student myself, I tend to put more effort into my work when I know I can have fun with it. Instead of working on summer project that is picked by a teacher, the idea of picking my own project-design seems more motivating and more enjoyable to work on. When students have the option to work on a project that they can choose from, they end up forgetting that they are working on a project. Instead, they are just having fun and thinking that they are just working on a new summer hobby. The more people that enjoy on what their project is going to be, they are more likely to complete the project faster and not procrastinate on the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e402f72567cc,6BFE57AA416B,This makes students gain better work ethic and not be lazy when completing a project they know that they don't have motivation for. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a7128d06b96d,6BFE57AA416B,A student-designed project either allows students to become more creative or have students show off their creativity skills ,Claim,Effective,,,
+65124013d493,6BFE57AA416B,"Rather than just meeting the requirements that the teacher has given them, a student can go above and beyond on a project when they choose their own project. If the school gives students their own way to create their summer project, it can show teachers how they work when they present them when the students go back to school. Allowing students to show off their skills can show both students and teachers what that student can do, and he/she can inspire other students to become more creative when there is another project that is assigned to them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c94ee2bf3242,6BFE57AA416B,The whole point of summer projects is for that students can make sure that they are still learning during their break. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e54b119c35f,6BFE57AA416B,"If they have to work on a project that is designed by a teacher, how would they ever feel motivated to actually learn from the project that they have to do? If a student gets to design their own project, they can pick their own project that it is interesting to them, and take their time to actually learn from it. Myself for example, I learn better when I have more fun, and when I find ways to make it more enjoyable. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+139c6715356f,6BFE57AA416B,"
+Although if a teacher-designed project would be assigned to students, it would be easier for teachers to grade, as they already understand the topic(s) that is chosen for them. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9d602c0f0d72,6BFE57AA416B,"However, students would barely learn anything about the topic that is chosen for them, because they are forced to work on that topic. Also when the students are back in school and they have to present their projects, the other students might not even pay attention to their classmates presenting, because they would already know the information that is going to be said. The classmates that I've talk to in my school state to my that they have more fun with a project when they get to pick their own topic to choose from, and tend to pay attention more to when their classmates present different projects topics. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+edcf6c4f91bb,6BFE57AA416B,"
+As it for being summertime when students have to work on their projects, it should be fun for them, as summertime is supposed to be time for students to have a break from school. That means not only they should enjoy their time tanning by the pool, vacationing, or even hanging out with their friends and family, they should work on a project that really speaks out to them, so that they can feel motivated to work on the project. If a project is assigned to students in the summer, it should be a student-designed project, so that it is more enjoyable/motivational, creative, and beneficial when helping them learn. This should help students enjoy their summer while continuing their learning.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5c0aafeb84ff,6C09B4AA6A77,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. I'll be using details from the article to form an eassay arguing whether the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom is valuable. I'll be sure to include, a claim for or against the value of using ths technology to read student' emotional expressions, evidence from the article to support the claim, and an introductions, a body, and a conclusion to my essay. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f61bd699153e,6C09B4AA6A77,why it's valuable ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4b3739d8362,6C09B4AA6A77,how we can use it to help other ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76f5433b3809,6C09B4AA6A77,how to use it correctly. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5522248c9ac,6C09B4AA6A77,"First of all let me explain the passge, the passage talks about how we can use technology to identify human emotions. How is this technology valuable, well it's very valuable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40ee9a95c024,6C09B4AA6A77,"The FACS (Facial Actions Coding System) which is the technology that identify humans emotions, can let us see how everyone is. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2a9c482adb3,6C09B4AA6A77,"We can use the FACS everywhere that will help us to help people. Help everyone, and even animals. Help everyone in there time of need. Help those whom don't want help. Those who can't control themselves. Those that can't think correctly. Those whom are at the blink of death. A lot of people and so many more lives can be save with this technology. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c18718a868f0,6C09B4AA6A77,How can we use it to help others? We can use the FACS to identify human emotions and help the ones that are sad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb0bcb2874a9,6C09B4AA6A77,"We can help them before somethings happens, like we can prevent a school shooting if we know how the persons feels. We can give them all the help they need. No lives have to be lost if we know how everyone feels. We can even stop people from killing themselves, we can change lives with this technology. We can even help those who don't want help because they are people to that are hurting. We have to help those in need and I know we can do it with the help of the FACS and change the world. It would be a lot safe out there. We can do all of this because of FACS and that's why i think its very valuable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8a0d4096f1e,6C09B4AA6A77,But there always a correct time to use this. If we can tell if someone is really depress that's when we do something because it's hard to control yourself when you are really sad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d199caef44a,6C09B4AA6A77,"We shouldn't just wait and see what happens, we have to do something about it, because we are all human. If we see someone very depress we try to cheel them up, but what if we can't tell. That's also another example when we should use them. We can stop things from happening, bad things. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+36de942d5934,6C09B4AA6A77,Futhermore I believe that the use of this technology can be very useful in many ways. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+53f50094bddf,6C09B4AA6A77,"In my essay i have show you why it's valuable, how we can use it to help other, and how to use it correctly. I also include a claim for or against the value of using ths technology to read student' emotional expressions, evidence from the article to support the claim, and an introductions, a body, and a conclusion to my essay. This technology called the FACS (Facial Actions Coding System) which is the technology that identify humans emotions, can help many people in there life, make it easliy for us to help those people, can help save people lives from hurting themselves or others, and make us prevent school shooting, people killing themselves, and save people life in many ways.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0f957e85fcb1,6C3788371B29,Cars have always been a big part society, it takes us from home to work to home agian. ,Lead,Adequate,,
+c53d763bb90f,6C3788371B29,"However, people fail to realize that driving cars is damaging our earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccaf3477490d,6C3788371B29,We don't have anywhere else to go if we keep killing earth ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eca9e527285f,6C3788371B29,The government should take action and try to get the people out of cars and on bycicles. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6382d653da10,6C3788371B29,"In Paris, the government banned certain cars to drive on certian days. In Robert Duffer's article it explains which cars are banned, ""On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered tro leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day."" Paris takes action in hopes to help their air pollution. The smog was so bad it ""rivaled Beijing, China"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5989939ded6c,6C3788371B29,"Vaugban, Germany tries an experiment. They make a suburb with real people, going to real life jobs without cars. This is one of the first car-free cities and it was great. Life continued, people still breathed, society was advancing without any help from a combersome vehicle. Not only did this city help with air pollution but it got people up and outside! People walked or used bycicles to get to where their were headed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76c99a26497b,6C3788371B29,Exercise is the one thing almost everyone pushes off but now with no cars you have to get that exercise in order to get to work! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1628c143bb63,6C3788371B29,"Even in Bogota, Colombia people believe '""It's a good oppertunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.""' Eventhough Germany didn't allow a single car, Colombia did allow there to be public transportation only( busses and taxis). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6047c0cc2945,6C3788371B29,"The people are happy and content with this simplistic lifestyle, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81a01eb1b419,6C3788371B29,"Elisabeth Rosenthal believes it to be ""The End of Car Culture"". What do you believe? Are you happy with the life you are living now? ""Has America passed peak driving?"".            ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+92dcca8f03ad,6C3B801F92D2,"Ever since cars were invented, they have widely been used as the primary source of transportation. They became so commonplace that their widespread use started to introduce negative impacts . As a result, some countries, or cities, have recently put in place programs or events to limit, or decrease, the amount of car usage in that area. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e480fdcc0a12,6C3B801F92D2,"There are many advantages to limiting car usage, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+eb1a8d1c3b18,6C3B801F92D2,not using cars is better for the environment ,Claim,Effective,,,
+787b5ccbc2b1,6C3B801F92D2,"that it allows the city to improve itself. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+b69d5a3df173,6C3B801F92D2,"In recent years, the environment has become a worldwide concern; one of the advantages to limiting car usage is that it will positively impact the environment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bea6b0b2fde4,6C3B801F92D2,"people all over the world are paying attention to what they can do to help the environment, meaning that this is an advantage that will appeal to a widespread audience. One way that limiting car usage will help is that it will reduce greenhouse gas emissions. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's essay ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", she writes, ""Passenger cars are responsible for 2 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe ... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States"". By limiting the usage of cars, the amount of greenhouse gases being emitted into the world would decrease substantially. While the idea that everyone would stop using their cars and the gas emissions caused by them would disappear completely is unrealistic, the prospect that a majority of the emissions could do so is perfectly reasonable. The reduction of these emissions would mean that the air quality would increase and be overall healthier for both all the world's population and all the wildlife across the world. Robert Duffer provides another example of how less car usage would impact the environment in his essay, ""Paris bans driving due to smog"". According to the article, an intense smog had covered Paris for five days, when the city decided to ban car usage over the course of two days. The cause for the smog was thought to be the high use of diesel fuel in France, with 67 percent of cars using it over gasoline, about 14 percent higher than the rest of Western Europe. The plan for the ban had been that cars with even-numbered license plates to not be used the first day and for ones with odd-numbered license plates not to be used the next day. In actuality, cars with odd-numbered plates were never banned from driving since the smog had cleared just after the first day. This shows the impact of limiting car usage. In just one day, a smog that was comarable to the one in Beijing, China, one of the most polluted cities in the world, was removed considerably after just half the normal amount of cars were used over the course of a day. If this was used all over the world, the result would be even more significant. This evidence supports that limiting car use is good for the environment in more ways than one. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8dfc7df78c09,6C3B801F92D2,"Additionally, the limited use of cars opens many opportunities for cities to improve themselves by adding new features or improving upon old ones. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2ba56538eb41,6C3B801F92D2,"In the article ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"" by Andrew Selsky, the changes that the Columbian city of Bogota has gone through in response to less car use are discussed. The changes are a direct result of the city's Day Without Cars campaign, where car use is banned for the whole city for one day out of a year. It reads, ""It has seen the construction of 118 mile of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor. Parks and sports centers have also bloomed throughout the city;uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up"".  These additions are in response to the city's inhabitants using alternative transport. Since cars could not be used, the public had to get to where they were heading by other means. Bogota was able to use the situation to improve itself by either fixing things already in place or adding new ones competely. Another way that a city improved itself as a result of limited car use is shown by Elisabeth Rosenthal in her essay ""In German Suburn Life Goes On Without Cars"". She writes, ""While there have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking, planners are now taking the concept to the suburbs"". One of the results of applying this idea to suburbs is that stores are placed within walking distance of houses rather than in a mall next to a highway. Vauban, the city where the changes took place, is taking advantage of the opportunities to open new stores. This change would not only create more business for the strore itself but improve the economy of the city by increasing spending. The overall impact that limiting car use has had on citites is that it provides opportunity for the city to improve itself. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d44ad797a67,6C3B801F92D2,"There are many advantages to limiting car use. Not only does it improve the environment by removing smog and reducing greenhouse gas emission, but it also allows the area to improve itself by building new features. For this reason, limited car use should be seen as an overall positive idea.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0f12eb988fd2,6C3B81B109A8,I claim that the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of the many reasons in the text he tells us. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+82d2ba6284e2,6C3B81B109A8,"He says that it is very simple to see from a safe distance, but harder when you get closer to it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3c3722011cf,6C3B81B109A8,he also presents the idea that each mission was unmanned and for a good reason ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fceeadd01dce,6C3B81B109A8,and lastly Venus has a very thick atmosphere of a poisonious gas. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+861289fcbde4,6C3B81B109A8,"These are all reasons he supports the idea that it is fun to study, but also dangerous. I will get more in depth with these reasons. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aecfef025564,6C3B81B109A8,"The first reason that the author supports this idea is when he says this statement in paragraph one, ""While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0d5293cd02d,6C3B81B109A8,"This shows that the author is trying to support the idea because he is saying Venus is easy to see from Earth, and a far distance, but when our space programs have tried to get closer, it has presented more problems that make it very difficult to examine more closely, which shows the author says Venus is worth studying, but dangerous. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80273eb3604c,6C3B81B109A8,"The second reason the author supports the idea is in paragraph two. He says ""Each mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e59a4e7adf36,6C3B81B109A8,"since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours."" This shows when the author says ""For a good reason"" that he is trying to say he supports the idea of us trying to study more about Venus, but is glad we are approaching it at a safe distance, and unmanned. This is another reason he is telling us that it is good to study, but dangerous. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dac90ef76443,6C3B81B109A8,"The last reason the author supports this idea is in paragraph three when he states, ""Even more challenging are the clouds of the highly corrrosive sulfric acid in Venus's atmosphere."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c46a3e3faff,6C3B81B109A8,"This shows that he is stating some of the facts that it is highly dangerous to go on Venus, by saying the words ""Even more challenging"" which presents he agrees with the idea that Venus is worthy to pursue studying, despite the dangers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfa0738088d4,6C3B81B109A8,"In conclusion, the reasons the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is because of the highly dangerous atmosphere, the spaceships that never survive landings on Venus for more than a few hours, and safe to see from a good vantage point but challenging when you get closer, all suggest that the author supports this idea. These are all reason as to how well the author does on being able to agree with this topic.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+02bd703e0256,6C3DE9491C5E,"From Monster trucks to Volkswagen Beetles, all automobiles are created to make life easier for people from all corners of the Earth. Many people start up their cars everyday without a second thought, whether trekking across the street or across the country. Others believe that cars are ruining the Earth, and put effort toward decreasing their car's ""footprint"" on the environment. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+387227d26b07,6C3DE9491C5E,People everywhere should consider limiting their car usage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5fdd6bf34f77,6C3DE9491C5E,A community with less cars has proven to also be one with less healthy citizens. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24a572d99f12,6C3DE9491C5E,"According to Source Two, Paris, a city known for it's aromatic scents, was covered with the smell and appearance of smog for days (they had near-record pollution: Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London). After a day in which all even-numbered license plates were banned from the streets of Paris, the smog cleared up a great amount (enough for the city officials to take the ban they had placed for odd numbered license plates the next day). The smog that was affecting the well-being of Paris' citizens had mostly disappeared after only one day of limited car use. If a community limits cars, its inhabitants will be almost forced to exercise more. According to Source 3, in Bogota, Colombia, where a ""Day Without Cars"" is held yearly, 118 miles of bike paths have been constructed, the most of any Latin American city. Less cars on the road in this city have led to other means of transportation being more popular, including walking and bicycling. These ways of getting around are much more healthy then their gas-powered alternative. Less traffic on roads will therefore leave cities healthier than otherwise. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2ce2d29c1839,6C3DE9491C5E,There are many more reasons why citizens should limit their personal car use. Owning a car is huge investment. You have to pay for gas and oil refills for any standard car based on how much it is driven. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4e4f7d10198,6C3DE9491C5E,limiting car use would also limit the pressure on car owner's wallets. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8e97b7f9bed,6C3DE9491C5E,"Car-driving, the catalyst to the wonders of travel, will continue to drive on the pollution of our Earth. Babysitters, doctors, students, and even the retired will thrive from limitations of car usage. Whether by limiting car usage or not, Earth's inhabitants need to ensure their planet is treated right.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5a2d1abdc2bc,6C3F752AFF5F,Although Venus has many dangers to it there are some parts of this planet that are very similar to Earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1f311eb88e7,6C3F752AFF5F,"By having so many similarities to earth we could later bring life to Venus.
+
+As well as Venus is right next to Earth so there wouldn't be many difficulties. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a204369167bb,6C3F752AFF5F,There are dangers to Venus but there are also some good qualities to it that could help us in the near future. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+70a00a576542,6C3F752AFF5F,"Venus is similar to Earth, only in some ways but there are many dangers of going there. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4ce29e884e57,6C3F752AFF5F,"As said in paragraph 3 ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Looking back at this, it is telling us all about the dangerd of even going to Venus. NASA has had previous missions but have failed because the spacecraft couldn't last a few hours after landing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e36b3451570,6C3F752AFF5F,Now obviously there has to be something on Venus or we wouldn't be going through all this trouble to get there. What is so good about Venus? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62a47fd02c19,6C3F752AFF5F,"Yes, Venus does seem like a scary place if you read about it, but the only reason scientists want to look into it more is because of the similarities it has to our Earth.
+
+As mentioned in paragraph 4 ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.
+
+Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."" Scientists want to look more into Venus because of what we could do with it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be5f898ed7af,6C3F752AFF5F,"There are many ways that Venus can help our next generations.
+
+All in all, NASA has been working on a new spacecraft that will go to Venus.
+
+This way we can find out what Venus can truly do for us.
+
+Although there are some threatning things among Venus, good comes from it too. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff5cc2255e3b,6C7C9840311F,I dont think that the principle should be able to make the students do an extracurricular activity that they dont want to do or like doing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a306e3c8eb12,6C7C9840311F,"if they dont want to they shouldnt have to maybe if they like doing student council, sports or working on the schools yearbook then they can. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8a629b4d632a,6C7C9840311F,students should be able to choose whether or not they do an extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+709ac1486da7,6C7C9840311F,if the principle makes the student do an extracurricular activity that the student doesnt like and if there is some other students that actually want to do that activity what ever that might be it might be full of kids already so the kids that actually want to do that activity he or she cant do that now because the class might be full and there is a kid in there that doesnt even want to do the activitty he or she got put in. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fcb7531385e0,6C7C9840311F,Its just smarter in general because theres also the kids that will complain about anything and if u just let them choose what ever activity they want to be in they can ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e08a702392ba,6C7C9840311F,"if they even want to be in anything if not then they just dont do any sports, student council or working on the schools yearbook but i definetley dont think that the principle should be able to choose what u do in school just like u get to pick your classes most the time but if they are full then u get other choices. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+920631347caa,6CA078E0C93F,"the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, the author describers how a new technology called the facial action coding system enables computers to identify, human emotion ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8fb4c9700af5,6CA078E0C93F,"the university of amsterdam, Dr. huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for human and copmputers to communicatre. a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we human use to express we feel. the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the the face, all 44 major musclues in the model must move like human muscles.
+
+the new emotion, recognition softwere track these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa, the different unit, thte softwere can even identify mixed emotion, each expression is compared against a neutral face showing no emotion. the humans perform this same impressive every day. for instance, we can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, that artist such as da vici studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotion.
+
+his new computer softwere stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. perharps Dr. huang emotion algorrithmms are different sort of ""Da Vinc code"" the Mona Lisa demonstration is really internded to bring a smile to thet're face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. a computer that knows when they're happy or sad. if they're smile when a web ad appears on they're screen, a simily ad might follow, but if they're frown, the next ad will be different.
+
+a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. the same technology can make conputer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, note Dr. huang, so computer need to undersatand that tooooo.
+
+had his actor carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotion on stage. feeling someone else's emotion state, may happen because they're unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression. whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotion ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+75c72350aadf,6CA078E0C93F,Dr. Huang just want people to used the technology about the computer of Making Mona Lisa smile. he want all the wourl people happy of about he did. he just want to see people are smile. he don't want people are sadness. that's why he making these technology. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b03528ace736,6D1FB567121E,Summer break is meant to give kids a break from school and the constant teacher-chosen workload. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5151a7e8160f,6D1FB567121E,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e5f23c88ae81,6D1FB567121E,they will allow kids to show their creativity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9b9ef7710f9,6D1FB567121E,"Being forced to create boring and dull projects is very demoralizing and will make a student feel trapped. to contrast, when students can design their own projects it will be more fun and it will let students think for themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d89cd69f7a4,6D1FB567121E,"Additionally, having student-designed projects will boost the amount of kids who complete the projects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7ee13adbfc84,6D1FB567121E,"To start, student-designed projects should be given to students because they let students creativity shine ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3c791dc6fab2,6D1FB567121E,"Creativity is an important part of every child's life, not being able to use it will make a child dull. For example, when someone does not practice or use something they often lose their ability to do it. Additionally, student-designed projects would let students show who they really are and what they enjoy. When students can show who they really are they feel happy and good about themselves. Also, when they can express what they enjoy they will attract other classmates that enjoy the same thing. Having friends that enjoy the same thing they do will not only improve their happiness but will also improve their work ethic towards what they enjoy. For example, I am in very demanding and somewhat difficult classes. Having friends in the same classes as me with the same goals makes it a lot easier. Without them I would most likely not work nearly as hard. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e024a917ff7d,6D1FB567121E,"To add, student-designed projects should be given to students because they will increase the amount of kids that will complete the project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+17c0883af737,6D1FB567121E,"When students are forced to complete something they do not enjoy some people just will not do it. If students enjoy the project and look forward to it many more will complete it. For example, I have been assigned many projects during my life. When a teacher gives the students more than one way they can do the project it always has more submissions than if it was only an essay. Specifically, after reading a book, my class had to do a final report. When the teacher gave us options such as a: poster, essay, picture, or model it had many submissions. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1794d4570a69,6D1FB567121E,"To contrast, many people would say that having student-designed projects would allow students to not work as hard as they would if they had teacher-designed projects ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6cd6a95c4948,6D1FB567121E,"What they did not consider is that it is summer break and that most students would not be working hard anyways. To add, having student-designed projects would allow the students to be more enthusiastic about the project and work harder. If you expect students to work hard during summer why even have a summer break? It does not make any sense to give students a break that they still need to work during. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+69b383744b24,6D1FB567121E,"In conclusion, summer projects should be student-designed because they will allow kids to show their creativity, and they will increase the amount of students who complete them. Giving students something they can choose will ultimately increase students work ethic and view of school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8ea5836ecc03,6D7E6399624E,"Firstly, i am for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions, becaue it is not someting that can just be eaisily told these days and it must have been even worst to tell in the past. I personally beilieve that it wold be best to have somehing that has been woked on by many people and can be very well depended on. These days no one can tell ho someone fels because of their facial expression. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+af170b4179a4,6D7E6399624E,"so in my essay will be giving evidence that supports whymi am for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+a71a52035e2e,6D7E6399624E,"Secondly, my evidence that supports that i am for the value of using this technology to read students emotionl expressions is in the text where it text states "" The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thoma Huang, of the University of illinois, working in collaboration with prof . Nicu sebe of the university of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate"". from this evidence i can definenly defend and give evidence for why i am for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. from tis quote i am for the value of using tthis technology to read students emotionl expressions because their are many people many universities who combind their knowlege and what they know together so off couse they would come up with something so great. by something so graet i mean humans, technology and emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e0d114e0450,6D7E6399624E,What i can also personally add to this parrgraph is things are way more depenable and understanding and way more better and trustfull and when many people join their heads together. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e30dc174b8b4,6D7E6399624E,"Thirdly, another evidence that supports that i am for the value of using this tehnology to read students emotional expressions is in the text where the text states "" The process begin with the computer model of the face .....then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. paul eckman......for example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle ......"" . from this evidence i should already know that i am for this technology and i agree with it being used to read students emotional expressions. I agree with it being used to read students emotinal expression, because just from the first four words of the quote i know that is is definently dependable ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+02d69134b7ad,6D7E6399624E,I know from those four words in the begining of the quote that this passage tells me everything that i need to know about this technology. It also leaves me without worries and question but the need to use it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4893236b8bbc,6D7E6399624E,"Fourth, another evidence that i can use that supports why i am for this the quote ""The software is the latest innovtion from "" just from this quote i can support why i am foe the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+32f5d089309c,6D7E6399624E,because i no that what ever company or what so ever this project will definently be graet and will as much as it is expected to do great ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4ac892e2a3b7,6D7E6399624E,"Another reason why i am for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions is the text states ""While looking at the mirror :......1....2...3...... does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?
+
+Can your lab partner recognize which one........accordig to facial feedback....."". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19554e873e1d,6D7E6399624E,"Also this quote "" Who ever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotion! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35cd74b9a57a,6D7E6399624E,from this quote i can say that people can't just understand your emotions and how you feel because of your face expression so that is wy their is a need for a technology that is thrustfull and has been developed with so much knowlege to help with all that and the curiusity of how someone feels from their facial expression. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+97f73f7191ca,6D7E6399624E,"To conclued i would definently say that i am for the valueof using this technoogy to read sudents emotonal expressions. This technogy is the latest technology so i can count on its new developments. This techology has been created by many developers many universities, many proffesors so am for sure that they made it the best that it should and needsto be. This technology helps us understand and fills us in with all the questions that we have of it and it and the human emotion and others. I love this technology and i hope it definently works for sure. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+50890d23ce7e,6DAE6E1E7492,"venus is one of the brightest points of the light in the night sky making it simple for an amaterur stargazer to spot. venus is a planet that you can float on and its the second planet from are sun it has proved a very challenging place to examinr more closely. People call venus the earth twin because venus is th closest planet to the earth in terms of density and size. venus, and mars, our planetary neighbor they both orbits the sun at diffrent speeds. these diffrences in speeds in othere to venus will be around the corner in space terms people have sent plenty of spacecrafts to land on the cloud draped world ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+813b281e4d4f,6DAE6E1E7492,venus would be a nice planet to study because i feel like is has alot of interesting things to know about like whats in it i would study a planet like venus and the size of venus is simular to the earth so it would be nice to know a place close to the sun ,Position,Adequate,,,
+06d6f1233745,6DAE6E1E7492,The part about being in venus it is 97 percent carbin dixode its more. challenging then are clouds and it live closer to the sum the. the earths does. Venus has the hottest temperature of any planet in the sloar system its hotter than mercury amd mercury is closer to the sum them venus is beyond hight temparture venus have powerful earthquakes it has alot of lighting streaks its seeking to the land. NASA wants to send people to venus to experiance venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4700f88252d9,6DAE6E1E7492,Venus is a very challenging place to go in visit Venus because the human ceriosity. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a38808220eed,6DEFC88D4E0B,"Imagine its a new school year and your principal his gone on the annulment to say that he his decided that all students must participate in one extracurricular activity like sports baseball,football, work on the year book, or do a book club. Some people might be mad look upset because they don´t feel like choosing one but am cool with it ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f6452aab2720,6DEFC88D4E0B,I agree about must participate in one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c348cd0f3e70,6DEFC88D4E0B,I can make newer friends or the new comer can make new friends easier ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1910fcdd2186,6DEFC88D4E0B,it give us some thing to do while we wait until our parents comes home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6814f92ba8e4,6DEFC88D4E0B,"Your parents or teacher might say say hi and you might mike a new friend that half a lie to me it easier said then done. Now you don´t know how people will react to a samples hi,hello,or sup they might give you a a sink face or a nasty face but having some activity you can make some that like to do the same activity you like to do .yall might make a brotherhood or a sisterhood that can happen with this. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c57d605d7c0,6DEFC88D4E0B,Having these activity give them time to go home and do what they got to do I know most of those activity ends at five or six and sports ends at seven sometimes. That give to time to make dinner or whatever go home eat do homework go to sleep or chill easy as that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bae4d569b96e,6DEFC88D4E0B,having these activity help our parents and it help us that why I have agree with the resins that every student must participate in one extracurricular activity because it help us make new friends i believe it will make it easier and give our parents enough time to get off of work and do what they got to do.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d30671f6bc3,6DF04169C765,"The "" Unmasking the Face on Mars"" was NOT created by Aliens. The Face on Mars is just a natural landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3ed2cbf38eec,6DF04169C765,because the Face on Mars looks just like a natural face ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+67aa4e625c70,6DF04169C765,"there is no eveidence that Aliens have been on the planet Mars, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f55e01c2133,6DF04169C765,"and some Scientist from
+
+NASA is only saying its an alien artifact because it'll benefit NASA in the long run ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bf18e173313,6DF04169C765,The Face on Mars looks just like a natural face. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1359bc6cfd8b,6DF04169C765,"Also, its just a natural landform. In paragraph 3, it restates, ""huge rock formaton . . . which resembles a human head . . .."" The illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth, which was created by shadows. So, the Face on Mars has human characteristics. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c22d2e5ab57,6DF04169C765,"NASA is only saying its life, and also saying the face was created by Aliens because itll benefit them in the long run. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+21d5122e4171,6DF04169C765,"In paragraph 3 it even says, "" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars."" Then in paragraph 4 it restates, ""It certainly did!"" Meaning, the engagemnet to the public and on Mars worked. Now, that NASA discovered the Face on Mars, it has become a pop icon, starred in Hollywood films, and ETC. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad6d17a40467,6DF04169C765,There is no evidence that Aliens have been on the Planet Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14442d050972,6DF04169C765,"It says the Face on Mars resembles a rock formation. Then. the shadows gave it eyes, nose, and a mouth. It says nothing about
+
+Aliens creating the Face . Although few scientist believe the Face was an alien artifact, many still believed it was a real Human Face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7bd3c5557cfd,6DF04169C765,"When, the MOC team snapped a picture . . . thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a website called JPL. The JPL website revealed a natural landform. Finally, there was no alien monument after all. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2dc5eb097cc,6DF04169C765,"In conclusion, The Face on Mars is a just a natural landform. First, The Face on Mars looks just like a natural face, there is no evidence that aliens have been on the Planet Mars, and NASA is only saying the face was created by aliens beacuse it'll benefit them in the long run. So. there is no way Aliens could have possibly created The Face on Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6e97df00a1f9,6DFB980B835D,"Have you ever wondered what it's like having to complete school assignment's over summer break? Chances are, probably not. Many schools are now requiring for summer assignment's to be completed, but the real question is should those assignment's be teacher-assigned or student-assigned? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c32d4dfa532e,6DFB980B835D,These assignment's should very well be student-assigned. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea3425661a31,6DFB980B835D,Letting the student choose their own assignment is a wonderful idea because what they choose is likely something they won't have a hard time completing and they're also still getting some sort of education. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b9deb25228ac,6DFB980B835D,Student's can still have fun over the summer while learning and preparing for the upcoming year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+84eeffb2d82a,6DFB980B835D,A student-designed project could also let the student work on their own time and pace because during the summer most people are out on vacation and don't have time to complete schoolwork. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ba9b5c3664d9,6DFB980B835D,"Student-designed summer assignment's would result in a relaxed, but still productive and educational summer that will help better prepare student's in the upcoming school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+56bbde45b686,6DFB980B835D,Summer project's should be assigned by teacher's and not student's because of the lack effort the student's will put forth. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bbdb585137fb,6DFB980B835D,"Having to do schoolwork over the summer is one thing, but making the work student-assigned is whole different ballgame. If the student chose what assignment's they would have to complete over the summer they most likely wouldn't finish it or not even look at it let alone take it out of their book bags. Teacher-assigned assignment's would make the student have to remember what to get done and when to have it done by or there will be consequence's. As a student they may not be fond of it but what it's doing is keeping them learning over the summer and starting them off nicely with solid grades in the upcoming school year. Think about this, during the school year if homework was optional who would do it? Now if a teacher assigned everyone homework and told them to have it done by a certain date for a grade, then see how many student's would complete their homework. It's night and day and the same thing applies in this case. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cae482dbfea2,6DFB980B835D,"Put yourself in a young students' shoes, you're in school for nine months and you finally can relax, go home, and just enjoy your time off because you did great during the school year and you deserve it. Then your teacher mentions summer assignment's that will be designed by him or her. The assignment's will likely be a load and it all has to be completed by a certain date. That's just completely unfair, because you work hard all year just to get time to relax and you can't. It's probably very overwhelming and young students need time to take a break and have fun especially after the long nine month slog they call school. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7ff56d6d1568,6DFB980B835D,Allowing the student to choose their own assignment's over the summer is great because they have no excuse to not get it done. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f9584bfc3282,6DFB980B835D,"The student would be working on their own time and not on any teachers'. During the summer when people are on vacation and need time off its a great idea to allow student's to get work done, but also have time to do what they desire over break. There's nothing better than working on your own time, having fun, and still getting things accomplished. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aecce3e7d871,6DFB980B835D,"The effort given in a teacher-designed assignment versus a student-designed assignment would be completely different. You're likely thinking a student won't do their work if it was up to them and not the teacher, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+cda4fc7ebb04,6DFB980B835D,"but that's false. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8bfc8c8e3c63,6DFB980B835D,"A teacher-assigned-assignment forces their student's to do schoolwork that they're just doing to get done or because they have to, not because they want to learn. In a system like that you dont learn anything and you especially don't have much fun either. Student's should learn to have fun but also want to be eager to want to be educated and want to learn something new. Telling the student's that the summer assignment is due on this day and get it done by this time or it's a zero won't accomplish anything but kid's that just want to get it over with so they won't receive a bad grade ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d06fb0bfe48,6DFB980B835D,A student-designed project would not only get them more prepared for the year ahead but would also give the kid's time to enjoy their summer and also learn at the same time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+718cbe91c2db,6DFB980B835D,"Lastly, student-designed summer assignments would result in a relaxed, but still productive and educational summer that will help better prepare student's in the upcoming school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dea1cd804f8e,6DFB980B835D,"Over the summer student's need time to just be kids and hang out, instead of stressing over a teacher-assigned project that is a overwhelming load of schoolwork. Working on your own time and choosing your own assignment is genius because you don't have to worry about anything or anyone else but yourself which would result is more summer assignment's being completed but not just completed but enjoyed being completed. Any teacher can force their kids to complete an assignment, but will the student's really enjoy learning over the summer on their own time compared to being forced to by a teacher. Student-assigned summer projects are the way to go in the future because we will definitely see better results especially going into the following school year. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eefcc87a0cbc,6E154A9B7943,"Today, the majority of adults own and operate cell phones on a daily basis, such as, texting, calling, and being on social media communicating to one another. But while using a cell phone while driving in the other hand is utterly dangerous ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3d7a26391ddf,6E154A9B7943,"First of all, you're not supposed to have your cell phone out when driving in the first place! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+497a2f849127,6E154A9B7943,"This increases the risks of an accident, and worst case scenario, death. Anything can happen if you look away even just for one second off the road. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34a13466bda5,6E154A9B7943,"To begin with, let's talk about our senses really quick. We use our eyes to see, ears to hear, hands to touch, tongue to taste, and nose to smell. When we are driving we mainly use our eyes, ears, hands, and feet. We use our eyes to see the road, as well as other cars. For our hands we use the steering wheel to maneuver the vehicle, and our feet we use the pedals to determine the speed. Lastly, we use our ears to hear our surroundings. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34b047227c32,6E154A9B7943,"For example, if we were going to make a call/text on the cell phone, you will lose all of those abilities, because you are distracted doing two or more things at once. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fd99ffb2c8d,6E154A9B7943,"In addition, the Hands Free Georgia Law states, ""all drivers operating a motor vehicle on any highway of this state are prohibited from: Holding or supporting, with any part of the body, a wireless telecommunications device or stand-alone electronic device."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54ba12b1a3c9,6E154A9B7943,"This emphasizes that the driver is not allowed to write, send or read any text-based communication, including a text message, instant message, e-mail or internet data, according to the Georgia Department of Driver Services. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f79ba12254a,6E154A9B7943,"Lastly, this goes for the same as drinking and driving. Any alcohol consumed inside your body will greatly be affected in your driving ability. The Alcohol Rehab Guide claimed that, you'll have a ""slow reaction time, lack of coordination, reduce concentration, decrease vision, and inhibit judgment."" These are ways alcohol influences you, and your driving capabilities. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f66a0497694,6E154A9B7943,"On to the dangers of using cellphones while driving. The General Cell Phone Statistics reports, ""that cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dae9f383e745,6E154A9B7943,"Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. 1 out of every 4 car accidents in the United States is caused by texting and driving."" These are numbers people need to start realizing that your life is more important than being on your phone communicating to someone else when driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28dc36fa32f2,6E154A9B7943,"In conclusion, using your phones while driving is prohibited. Based from these reports, there were evident factors to the point that cell phone use while driving does cause accidents. Therefore, that's why we have laws to prevent these irresponsible acts. Together we can end these numbers if we just take more control in ourselves.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+30b769bdc4a4,6E1B4AF3CDC3,The use of this technology to reaf the emotioanl expressions of students in a classroom is valuble. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c7987d1f403c,6E1B4AF3CDC3,"BecauseEckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger,disgust, fear, and sadness and then assocaited wach with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. In a real face or in printed face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da9eadb5f6b7,6E1B4AF3CDC3,Using a software can read someones emotional expression of a student in a classroom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+422bf598473e,6E1B4AF3CDC3,You could also look at someone and maybe guess how they are feeling ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+52a3a43a7c97,6E1B4AF3CDC3,You dont always need a software to figure out how someone is feeling. And you can tell how someone is feeling by the feedback that they give you ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c854f46bca11,6E1B4AF3CDC3,At least according to some new computer software you can recognize emotions. The software is the least innovation. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7da62b412335,6E1B4AF3CDC3,"The process begins when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. In fact, we humans perfoorm this same impressive ''calculation'' everyday. It could be hard to figure out someones facil expression but using thast software could help you figure out what they are feeling. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0bd97cafe4d5,6E1B4AF3CDC3,A classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aafdc7271b28,6E1B4AF3CDC3,"There are a lot of examples in the text like there is one that talks about your frontalis pars lateralis nuscle which is above your eyes. This is technology is valuable it gives lots of good way you could read or figure out someones expression or feeling. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage, Empathymay happen because we unconsciously imitate another persons facial expressions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+daefb7cf749b,6E1B4AF3CDC3,You could argue that the use of the technoloy is valuable cause maybe they used that to make Mona Lisa Smile thats the name the article. So they could've used that as a advantage. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c4c7ab479906,6E3219126915,"Having children partake in extra curricular activities can help your children, become more sociable, and become more involved in their schools. After school programs are also very good at helping new students become more integrated into the school system. By partaking in extracurricular activities you can meet new people and gain great experiences. By having your children participate in extracurricular activities like, sports teams, or student run organizations, the experiences you could gain could potentially be very rewarding for your later years. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0d50fb7a1c03,6E3219126915,"Children all over the world participate in extracurricular group activities. For example young children in Switzerland have little after school groups called ""Horts"" where they eat together, clean together, finish homework together, and play together. Those ""Horts"" can form life-long friendships and form even closer bonds to their classmates. I think by implementing those same practices we can help future generations become even more tight knit and overall become much closer. So instead of eating alone at lunch and being sad, your child would have a much happier lunch with good friends and a much tighter knit school community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+130bf89328f3,6E3219126915,"by partaking in extracurricular activities, your child can form stronger bonds, stronger friendships, and even new friends as well. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+4ebd5c690b13,6E3219126915,"extracurricular activities can help children relax, and in some circumstances, they could potentially help children improve their grades. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d59ba87bc889,6E3219126915,"one of the best stress relieving thing you can do is to exercise, but most people don't like to exercise because they don't think its fun. But if you exercise with friends, then it can be really fun, because generally everything you do with friends is more fun than doing anything alone. So by joining a sports team you get to relieve your stress, by exercising and you get to have fun with some friends. Also if you happen to be super talented when it comes to your sport you could even get offers to play college and you could potentially even receive scholarships. But if you want to receive good scholarships you must also be a good student, now generally most schools offer tutoring or homework clubs which can be very helpful if you want to improve your grades. So in general after curricular activities can help improve your grades and can help you feel more relaxed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+70e3a54f4571,6E3219126915,"Now some people may ask, ""What if my child doesn't like sports?"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+134b104867e9,6E3219126915,"You can tell them that not all after school activities are sports related, and so instead of making your kids play sports try letting them pick what they want to do. There are so many good clubs and organizations to join in school so why not take advantage of it? For example you could join the yearbook committee or join student council, there are so many options we could keep going forever. Now what if your child does not like any of the extracurricular activities? Schools are great places to try new things, just because your child has never done something before does not mean they won't necessarily like it. So before you jump the gun and say you child does not like something maybe let them explore their options first. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+651a8601f8b2,6E3219126915,"by having your children participate in extra curricular activities, the experiences that were gained, would be so rewarding in the end for growing children. In my opinion extracurricular activities are great places for children to discover who they are, what they like, what they want to be when they grow up and so much more. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+63a68ea3bf82,6E3219126915,I believe that all students should participate in extracurricular activities because they can help children like me discover who they are.  ,Position,Effective,,,
+e849a9f06a99,6E534D6E2282,Some people like to drive while otherss don't ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+14306141e5bf,6E534D6E2282,some countries are making bans or just limiting the usage of cars. This can have more advantages than disadvantages. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+febd2031d823,6E534D6E2282,When people drive cars they let out pollution into the air which harms the atmosphere. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bee9c44f1819,6E534D6E2282,"The advantages to this is that if people don't drive that much anymore the pollution can be stopped at a certain point and cause no harm anymore of course the air might still be polluted but with a less perentage. People would definitely use money on something else thtne to try and get the new car or just use it on gas. There are alternatives to limit the use of cars.
+
+Sociolagists believe if this continues with people limiting car transportation that ""it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emission, just behind power plants."" so if we all got to think about it we are basically doing a favor to oursleves by helpiing the planet by limiting the use of cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4929b97c5e99,6E534D6E2282,the peoplw in the community could stop spending more money due to cuts in the job. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f90fbf3b8ae8,6E534D6E2282,"They waste money on gas on new cars, etc. When really you could be doing something bttter with taht money. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8fa6c88fe942,6E534D6E2282,"Most poeple dont even really need cars they use them for the heck of it. Teenagers use it just to go around with friends or go to work but really they could limit that use and find another way of transportation. This isn't saying to just stop using your car but just findfing a way to say that if you dont really need your car but just using it for fun then you could limit that use and instead of driving to places that are close to you just walk there.
+
+The author of ""The End of Car Culture"" Ellisabeth Rosenthal even said that her own kids being 19 and 21 ""have not even bothered to get a driver's license...."" they find other ways to get around she said ""they organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends"" as i said before there are alternatives to limiting the usage of cars and this could be one of them if you are with friends and all are going to the same palce then you ca just share one car so that not all of the cars are ut it can avoid traffic and cost less money to you also. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a54b2f761390,6E534D6E2282,I say that there are alot of advantages to limiting the use of cars and we could most definitely make more. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8f970885529d,6EA56718315A,In paragraph 2 the author states that all the trips to the planet have been unmaned for a good reason the spacecraft didnt last longer than 3 hours thats why it dangerous and hard for us to study the planet. The planet woud be fun to study but almost imposible the temperatures are over 800 degrees fahrenheit that would be imposible for anything to survive on the planet that meaning humans. Venuses atmosphere is also way to dangerous for us to even breath in. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+660b73b64a05,6EA56718315A,The planet is so attracting to NASA because the planet is related in shape in form they belive it could have had oceans and could have supported some form of life. The earth is are closes planet and it know as earths twin. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01d096bfb3fb,6EA56718315A,"NASA claims that a trip to venus would be possible, hard but survivable. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b7cb8bbbfe23,6EA56718315A,The problem is with the plantes surface being so hot that they would not be able to take samples of rock or gases so what would be the point. They are working on something that would make the spacecraftes last longer in these conditions so they could retrive samples. They have some projects in the works that have lasted 3 weeks in such conditions. the trip to venus with humans going could happen but i dont think it will anytime soon ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60fa97e793c4,6EA56718315A,It could be possible but we will have to wait to find out. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+17b9a1615e2c,6ED32B9136F8,Have you ever thought of being a Seagoing Cowboy. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f29c3c5fe363,6ED32B9136F8,"When being a Seagiong Cowboy ""It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs."" (from paragraph 9) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc7585967b78,6ED32B9136F8,You didn't just see the world you go and help it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4687757fb8bb,6ED32B9136F8,"It is a dangerous job though. ""One rainy night, after making my hourly report to the captain, I slid down a slippery ladder on my backside. My heart raced as I shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped my slide, keeping me from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. I was happy to be alive. But I couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs."" paragraph 7. That shows Seagiong is a dangerous job and it's very serious trying not to get hurt. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cc4466a21f46,6ED32B9136F8,In the process we do have a little fun when we aren't doing much. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56a8310c507c,6ED32B9136F8,"""I found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys and I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed."" paragraph 8. That was some fun on board we do to pass time. Since we were around the world we could go cite seeing and things like that away from the ship. These trips introduced this small town boy to the world.
+
+The world is a wonderful place to see. Like I said off board we'd go cite seeing. ""Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing Acropolis in Greece was special."" paragraph 5. Seeing the world is speical and not most people can afford to do that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f87d093c12fc,6ED32B9136F8,you should join ,Position,Adequate,,,
+35ed42219a4d,6ED32B9136F8,"When you do this it's adventurous, scary, fun, and amazing. Those words explain it all. So join the Seagoing Cowboys. If you don't you would be missing on a great oppurtinity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+73118bddf1bf,6F8200CADE90,The Facial Action Coding System technology that let you reads emotional expressions of students. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b7be39d653ff,6F8200CADE90,I strongly disagree with this statement ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c397956a1933,6F8200CADE90,because emtions is not some that you can just get a computer software to scan you to let you know if your happy or sad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+410b6a87ee7f,6F8200CADE90,"How can a computer just express how humans feel emotions are some you feel when another person tell you that you are speacial, and not by letting a computer tell you. Computers are program to do what you wan them to do and help with things such as homework, research pappers and essays they are a software system bulit to help you with over the site needs. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6da593a4d24,6F8200CADE90,Dr. haung and his collegue are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c3ecc87aeeb,6F8200CADE90,"I feel like you can't just program a computer to pick what emotions you think students are feeling,a and what if the software system was wrong and thats not what the student was feeling. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ea18812abe4,6F8200CADE90,"Emotions are a feeling you get when you feel like you don't have a care in the world , or when that special someone makes you happy because they smiled at you those are emtions they are inside you not on a machine that was bulit by man to tell you how you feel. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abc290cd7bfa,6F8200CADE90,"And in my conclusion the facial expressions for each emoion are univeral oberves,and even though individuals show varying degress of expressions. Each student have the own facial expression is compared aginst a neutral face showing no emotion in a student face. A machine that will let you know if a student is borde or confused is good but that's why we have are own voice to let our teacher know that we need help. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+15ee353d2ef3,6FA24C314388,"The author states in paragraph one, ""While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9044185c282f,6FA24C314388,"Venus is safe, but you need to know challenges come along with it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa459ef854e6,6FA24C314388,"In paragraph eight it says, ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73fe3bb964c6,6FA24C314388,the author values the challenge and strives for the goal. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+edbcb1477a04,6FA24C314388,"Although the author may enjoy studying Venus and it's challenges, this study comes with it's difficulties. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d12e445f31e,6FA24C314388,"The author states in paragraph six, ""Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.""reffering to how they, ""cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance."" The challenges they face predict how worthy of a pursuit Venus really is. The author states in paragraph five, ""Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" this meaning that this would be a risk, but they will survive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b47fbcb8fc12,6FA24C314388,"The author states in paragraph eight, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bfac28b89fb0,6FA24C314388,what we do or where we travel should not be limited by dangers and fear. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37107691bcea,6FA24C314388,"If we let dangers and fear overcome us, will we ever get anything accomplished? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb40dfc47b16,6FA24C314388,"We let danger and fear go, and let the power of adventure come through. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+eba456ce59b1,6FAA9368824D,"This could be it, the new Facial Action Coding System ! This system is a very unique way to tell and spoil how you are really feeling and what your emotions are. This new system starts with a 3-D computer model and all of the human muscles. It will basically scan your face and tell you your emotions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1350bb7f01ed,6FAA9368824D,I think this is a fantastic way ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9fd42efa5feb,6FAA9368824D,to get people to change there mood or to tell how people really feel because people hide there emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+03f992818a60,6FAA9368824D,this system could be a new big thing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ce67a47e9b0,6FAA9368824D,"Some people may not agree on many things, but maybe people could try this ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+708d53e03fb0,6FAA9368824D,. Some adults worry about how student or there children are feeling and if they did the Facial Action Coding System it would be a way to express there emotions and tell how they really feel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+347046ac9833,6FAA9368824D,"It's as simple as a fake or real smile, the rising of an eyebrow, or even the squinting of your eyes. All of those qualities can tell you what your emotions are with using the Facial Action Coding System. Like the passage states, "" The Mona Lisa demomstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face "", and so could the FACS. Seeing student down isn't pleasent and shouldn't be. Using the FACS is a way to tell, but don't put on a fake smile ! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a2e4477cdc8,6FAA9368824D,The Facial Action Coding System could go world wide and change lives. It could go to every school and make a difference ! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abd6c72ca989,6FAA9368824D,This system could be valuable but some people may see it different. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9cef73234746,6FAA9368824D,Not everyone would want to do this because some don't want to express there emotions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3fc50fe887b4,6FAA9368824D,"If schools invested in this system, it could change those that don't want expressed to being expressed and happier. It could also just tell you where your're at and what emotions you could work on or otherwise. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+67aa66cf0f14,6FAA9368824D,"Some may like, and some may not. Reasearchers show the putting on a ""
+
+Real Smile "" can make you happier and change your mood. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0913a9698e6,6FAA9368824D,"The science of emotions could be a thing of the future, but even more so with the Facial Action Coding System.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a63dde543445,6FAADEC1F061,"Many countries and cities have cut down the usage of cars because of the pollution that they cause. Some countries created days dedicated to not driving cars, and if someone violated this, they would be fined. Some people accepted this and embraced it, while others did not like the idea of not being able to drive at all. That was why when Paris forced a driving ban, almost 4,000 drivers were fined according to the article ""Paris bans driving due to smog"" by Robert Duffer. They did this because they are the city in Europe with the most pollution. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+87859255cca3,6FAADEC1F061,not driving has many advantages that help you and your city. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54e23027b97b,6FAADEC1F061,One advantage to not driving is that it reduces a lot of stress. And it also helps clear all the traffic off the streets. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+833abeaea2d9,6FAADEC1F061,"Many places are trying to make things closer together and easier to get to, to encourage walking over driving, Andrew Selsky mentioned in his article ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota."" He also mentioned that ""parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks..."" So this has caused the people in Bogota, Colombia to love walking no matter the weather.
+
+In the article, ""The End of Car Culture"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, she mentions that America's love of cars has decreased a lot. She also has stated that ""a study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009"". People are now car-pulling or walking. Car sales have decreased as well. In some cities like Vauban, Germany have cut car usage all together and are completely car free as mentioned in the article ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On without Cars"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3683f178212,6FAADEC1F061,"there are far more advantages to not taking car then there are disadvantages. It is important to cut back the usage of cars to cut back on pollution in the world. Many countries have already done so, which has only been very beneficial for them. People are happier and less stressed out, the air is clean of harmful fumes. Which is why it is so beneficial for more countries and cities to cut back on the use of cars, so people can be more happy and healthy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bf88fcb24e02,6FD0E82AB64D,"While the idea of a computer being able to reconize the emotions of sudents in the classroom is an intresting one, it simply wouldn't work well enough when put into action. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+94e801d51bc4,6FD0E82AB64D,"When it tells of how it could modify the lesson when it recognizes a student becoming bored sounds reasonable, when you think about it, having a computer changing a lesson simply due to possibly a single student becoming bored with it, would not only make the lesson longer, but maybe even worse off than it might've been. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+884ab3538b76,6FD0E82AB64D,"There is also te question of what if the computer gets something wrong or has a glitch? what if it accedentily misinterpruts sadness as anger for example. Not only will this cause a plethera of complications, it may also lead to the computer making other mistakes in the process. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1bbbdaf7f92,6FD0E82AB64D,"While it is an intresting idea, it really needs to be utterly perfect in every way or else it could cause many problems. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0c713f856fe2,700BD7047E86,"A claim that evalutes how well the author supports the idea is ""Often referred to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2afafe9c1f3f,700BD7047E86,""" Sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to venus."" ""EAch previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours."" ""Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" "" A thick natmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus.""
+
+The suface of venus is over 800 degress, that is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. These conditions on Venus are far more extreme. Venus conditions also beat submarines divinging into the deepest parts of out oceans. Ir would liquidfy metals. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar sysem even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Venusian geology and weather presents additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.
+
+Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Venus still has some features just like Earth. The planet has rocky sediment and includes familar features like valleys mountains and craters but, you have to consider given the long time frames of space travel.
+
+Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. A cehicle hpvering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of the way. You would have to be 30 plus miles above the surface. The temperture will still be hot around 170 degrees. The air pressure would be close to sea level on Earth. ""Radation would not exceed Earths levels."" The conditions on Venus would be survable for humans. "" Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering sandard forms of photography and videpgraphy ineffective.""
+
+"" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" ""Reaseachers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2506e8ed9c18,7091F3705B94,"Reading ones emotions using technologydoesn sound os bad but it also sounds just as badas it seems to be good technology for someone to have for family use, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+f94b855f8f32,7091F3705B94,"Mona Lisa was used for this experimet, and showed happiness, and some other objecrs and mostly was happiness, resultingin a somewhat successful attempt at technology.. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+136fdc4f25e1,7091F3705B94,Im siding for this as it can reveal a persons inner emotions and see if they are suffering on the inside out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b2e6f3cd6d0,7091F3705B94,"Besides, its not everydy you can judge emotion by the face only right? it would only help us more in the end then hurt us in the long run. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+429ad2c181d2,7091F3705B94,"But of course the cost of the product would be a quite big infact, maybe to big for distribution, whichcan lead to problems later on. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cfbc8c6b6042,7091F3705B94,"Sure, using your mouth muscles revealing emotions is easy, but it can be a bit hard for those with stage fright or insocial status to show emotions around strangers, thats why this inventions is a great thing to me to know and have in the world of mysteries. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4a81afa4d6dc,709820813997,I agree with the principal that the students should participate in an after school activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+523ead966c54,709820813997,I believe that it could be a good way for the students to find new friends with the same interests as them. Students could also try to find clubs that catch their interest ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f14dcc8564d8,709820813997,"if they didn't have a club that they wanted to join, and maybe they would enjoy that club. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fda4d56920f,709820813997,"Staying after school for clubs could get kids off of there phones, and help them to stay active. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+06c29fe0cc4a,709820813997,"the students get an opportunity to do the things they like, that they may not have the opportunity to do at school or at home. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+35cce9021824,709820813997,"The students will make new friends because they all have at least one thing in common with each other. If they were to hang out more, then they could start to find out that they have a lot more in common. Making new friends at that activity will make the students want to go back to that activity so they can see their friends again. This would go perfectly with the idea that the principal had. The student wants to go to something that the principal is telling them that they have to go to. This gives the principal what they want, and it gives the students what they want. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+211d545c6845,709820813997,"Usually when students get home from school, they use their time being on their phone or playing video games. When they go to an after school activity, they use some of their free time constructively. If the student went to the sports club, then they would get more physical exercise. If the student does yearbook, then they get to learn about different activities going on throughout the school. If the student participates in the student council, then that student gets to help the community through service projects. All of those clubs provide better use of the students time, rather than just sitting at home doing nothing. If the students actually enjoy cutting back on devices, then would try to manage their time so they are staying away from screens and doing something that is stimulative. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+277f48c8bc21,709820813997,Sometimes none of the activities catch the eyes of a student. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1e60cf85a063,709820813997,"Maybe if they were forced to choose one activity, they would find a passion in that activity that they didn't know that they had ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e1d4660002cc,709820813997,"Some students don't have enough hobbies, if they even have any at all. Making them choose an activity could possibly interest them in whatever they chose, and they would start to take up that activity as a hobby. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+05899324e9c1,709820813997,"Now that the student has a hobby, that student will most likely spend time doing that hobby instead of doing the other activities that keep the student from being productive. The student will now think that if he gives something new a try, they will enjoy whatever it the new activity is. Now he will want to do other new activities that exercise either his body or his mind. Soon his free time will be filled with the hobbies that are good for him and not the time wasting ones. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8f242e339830,709820813997,"If the student already enjoys one of the activities provided, then it gives the student an opportunity to participate in that activity. Sometimes students just can't find time in their busy schedules to do the things that they enjoy. Staying after school would be the perfect time for that student to do the activity that they want to do. Maybe the student wasn't selected for the yearbook elective in school, but because there is a yearbook activity after school; that student can now do yearbook like she wanted to. Some parents can't afford for their child to do certain activities like play a sport. If there was an opportunity for the students to stay after to do a sport for free, they would take it. The student gets to do something that they have always wanted to do, but that their parents could never afford. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+78e9b04bbcda,709820813997,"The principal making the kids stay after for an activity will most likely result in a positive outcome for the students. Whether it results in new friendships, trying new things, or just being able to do something that the student loves. The principal should make every student participate in and after school activity, because it is beneficial to them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d98e594f9322,70B291155F0E,"Everyone likes to have fun, that's undeniable, but is it fun when you're told you have to do it? Although playing a sport you love or spending time on the year book is fun, it's unfortunate that it wasn't really you're choice to do so. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2d9a97bd57d1,70B291155F0E,students shouldn't be forced to do an extra curricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a8a6a316bc5,70B291155F0E,students are already busy with homework ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+481c4dba8b13,70B291155F0E,may just want some time to them self ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+727c45d43acf,70B291155F0E,either way extra curriculars are never as fun when you're told you have to do them. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8098931662f4,70B291155F0E,"Students are busy, either with homework, studying, family, and friends, juggling it all is hard enough. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fe2632d57a0,70B291155F0E,"If students are being forced to add another thing to their plate are they really being set up for success? For example if a brand new high school student just moved to town and was already very stressed about catching up in classes, taking tests, and making new friends, being told they need to join an extracurricular would just make things harder. It would be better if they got time to do everything they needed and maybe choose to play a sport with some friends they made the next year or maybe sign up for yearbook, but by choice not because they had to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a8de442ff6cd,70B291155F0E,Being a full time student takes a whole lot of time away from friends and family and having an extra curricular takes up even more of that time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20cb28d9a668,70B291155F0E,"Being with the people you love is so important so why wouldn't schools want to promote and value that rather than force their students to have schedules full of an unnecessary extra curricular that a student may not even want to do. What if you wanted to go to the mall with your cousin whos only in town for the weekend but you can't miss soccer so instead you spend 2 hours running laps and passing a ball, it would make anyone like that sport a little less. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a490d73e6beb,70B291155F0E,"If a student is being taught you don't have to love the thing you're doing, what matters is you're doing it, are they really being taught the right thing? When they go to get a job that makes a lot of money but they don't really love the job they probably won't be as successful and happy but if students are taught early on that doing what you're passionate about is important, that's a whole lot more important than a random extra curricular activity that they only signed up for because they had to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5da36de7e0ee,70B291155F0E,"Although there's plenty of benefits from doing an extra curricular, being forced to do it will make it so much less fun for students, so why not give students the choice to participate rather than forcing it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5295a4ff5ab1,70B291155F0E,"Students shouldn't be required to do an extra curricular activity, maybe because their busy, or maybe they would just rather spend time with friends and family. Either way the reasons shouldn't be questioned, but the choice should be given. So give them the choice, the choice to play football with you're closest friends, the choice to go to the mall with you're cousin, the choice matters more than the activity so why should it be taken away.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d2d0a93268d,70CAE1192018,There are pleny of advantages fellow citizens get for having limited car usage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+941b48b21846,70CAE1192018,Fewer people are getting there license and using cars each year anyways. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4898c6d89170,70CAE1192018,it is true that people without cars would have to go through the rain or the cold weather every time the weather looks ominous and people would have to worry about getting to school or work on time. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4eb8884d4d00,70CAE1192018,"But, Limiting or taking away cars would clear the air of smog and less people would have stress. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b352ec6263d4,70CAE1192018,by limiting car usage you can reduce smog. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4c24092e093a,70CAE1192018,"""After says of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city""(Duffer, ""Paris bans driving due to smog""). If all cars or vehicles were to stop being used the air would clear easily and we can all live in clear air. ""The smog cleard enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday""(Duffer, ""Paris bans driving due to smog""). If they made like a schedule for which days cars will be banned and what days aren't, then the air we breathe will be better than ever and everyone will still be able to use there cars how they feel like. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e85160e88da6,70CAE1192018,People will become less stressful when not using a car to get to places. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ad3023dbf5d,70CAE1192018,"""It's a good opportuntiy to take away stress and lower air pollution, ""said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle wiht his wife""(Selsky, ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota""). Without cars theres people walking along the side walks talking, people not having to worry about saftey on the road as much, people riding bicycles and skateboarding, and just a great way to excerise just by walking outside. ""The rain hasn't stopped people from participating,' said bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus""(Selsky, ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota""). The fact that people dont care about the rain makes me think that people are enjoying this car-free day and there's no reason to stop it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3bfae018a814,70CAE1192018,"A few days or even weeks without cars is a great idea for reducing stress and air pollution. There are even more reasons why we should have a car-free day like time conservation, emission lowerage, safety improvement, and resource conservation.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+04d75460c675,70ED039EAD61,Students these days lack extracurricular activity. Mainly kids focus on their main core classes that only serve in those seven hours of school. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c3b6cc9dab09,70ED039EAD61,In my opinion I agree that the school should provide a variety of athletic and academic activities at or after school. I would highly recommend this to all schools. ,Position,Effective,,,
+4a3404cb82e0,70ED039EAD61,"Not only should students be as smart as they are, but that students should have the ability to choose at least one activity that they would love to do. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+019bfced242a,70ED039EAD61,Everyone expresses themselves in different ways which make them who they are. If my principal ever gave this opportunity to my school then I would be thankful ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d06ea19c7608,70ED039EAD61,These activities the school would provide students would give them an extra activity that makes them who they are today. Students by all means deserve this so they can express themselves to other people and make an impact. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f251fd41d82,70ED039EAD61,"I believe every student would wish to just come home from school and lay in bed while they watch TV or play on their phone. This should not be the case although this situation happens everyday.
+
+Instead of looking forward to watching your favorite show when you get home from school look forward to something totally different. People are getting more and more lazy and I'm sure the school could agree as well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed6f1be7ba78,70ED039EAD61,Providing these extra activities will prevent students from being lazy which would help themselves. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4db6d09c823,70ED039EAD61,When students participate in these activities it not only helps themselves but different schools and colleges look at that in your applications. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27d982614fa6,70ED039EAD61,You might not realize by doing these activities provided for you help you in the long run. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+486ae8b766e5,70ED039EAD61,Colleges in different states look for this and are amazed by seeing the things you do in your everyday life. Doing these sports and academic activities that you love doing can even give you a job all about the certain things you love doing everyday. For example my extracurricular activity outside of school is lacrosse which definitely made a gigantic impact on my life and I absolutely adore lacrosse and want to continue doing it in college. Which gives you an example from what you love in life brings you great things in the future. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf7551d183cb,70ED039EAD61,All students schools should be able to have the chance to express themselves in any way possible. If schools make this decision all staff will get to see a hue change in the students. It is just an overall great and smart decision that schools need to make. From me agreeing with this suggestion I hope new things come our way in our everyday school life!        ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d88baf7fa64d,70F8687E59CC,I think this technology which is called the '' Facial Action System'' is valuable because it would help out teachers and students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e4a51c07fb0c,70F8687E59CC,i think it would be cool if the technology really do can read students feelings because it would be really helpful for teachers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57c7931f97d2,70F8687E59CC,It is because when students are in bad mood teachers don't understand it so having the technology would help the teachers know that he or she is not in a good mood. Those are the reasons why the technology could do this ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cde1d7ea0350,70F8687E59CC,In paragraph 8 it said that when you have a false smile you can tell because the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle the risorius which is called the orbircularis oculi pars palpabraeus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5ac33aaf4aa,70F8687E59CC,In a real smile the zygomatic major which is the muscles that begin at your cheeks bones that lift the corners of your monuth. In 6 paragraph it said that the computer can determine how you feel. for example if you smile then the web ad appears on your screan and if you frown the next ad will be different. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f7aaaa80bfe6,70F8687E59CC,it also said that a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e39048bed1e4,70F8687E59CC,In that same paragraph it said that the same technology can make a computer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery alos it said that most humans communtication is nonververbal including emotional communication. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3fdb652466f,70FA630251FB,The face wasnt designed by aliens. There isnt any proof that alienseven exsist. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+79c17b180dd0,70FA630251FB,"The face is an illusion, you have to catch it at the right angle because if you catch it at another angle you ont be able to see it. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24e9750dcd82,70FA630251FB,"You can see that aliens didnt make it because when they took the picture in 1998 you couldnt really see the face, but in 2001 you could see it 3 times better than the first one. When taking pictures you always have to get the right angle because either something gets left out or something dosent shows up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+10b091107727,70FA630251FB,If there were any aliens we would have seen them due to the fact that we have spacecrafts taking pictures of it and we have been on the planet ourselves. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+41035e4bf249,70FA630251FB,If aliens did make it why are we just noticing it why didnt we notice it the other times. or better than that why havent we seen any aliens working on it. If aliens did do it why is that the only thing they made why havent they made other things why just a face? We all know that aliens dosent exsist so stop saying that until we have evidence that aliens exsist. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+53e5056c339b,70FBC86A01C6,Studying venus is a worthy persuit despite its dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eee4ff59f6d5,70FBC86A01C6,The author has a few reasons of why he thinks this ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2d0fc41bb277,70FBC86A01C6,Some of them are to find out what it is made up of ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ffe563954eb,70FBC86A01C6,Another one is to try and find out why there is no life on mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67560c30084b,70FBC86A01C6,"Also even though he thinks they should explore it he talks about the dangers and how really dangerous it is. There are a lot of risks to exploring venus but it would be worth it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ed83fdc4c8d,70FBC86A01C6,One thing that the authro does well to support his idea is he gives a lot of compelling resons of why he thiks venus is worth exploring ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a9f9c1912b5c,70FBC86A01C6,One of the reasons why he things its worth exploring is because they can find out what venus is made up of by taking rock samples. I think this is a good reason becuase it explains how the author wants to explore venus despite its dangers ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8179a0b84781,70FBC86A01C6,Another reason why he thinks it should be explored despite its dangers is becuase they can figure out why there is no life on venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2228b8d50ed7,70FBC86A01C6,I also think this is a good reason becuase it proves why venus should be explored even though it is dangerous according to the author. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+730924ce0834,70FBC86A01C6,In conclusion the author has a good point of why venus should be explored despite the dangers. One of his reasons is to find out why there is no life on venus. Another reason is to find out what venus is made up of. I think these are good supporting reasons because they prove why venus should be explored even though it has dangers. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+347e497e107f,710EFFD2AFE1,"The Facial Action Coding System is should not be use in classroom, or in anywhere ",Position,Adequate,,,
+01c40a95999a,710EFFD2AFE1,It's not good to know how everyone feels about each others ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67fbdc51155b,710EFFD2AFE1,"because if we do know how we feel about each other we will all hate each other. Even for a computer it's not good to know how humans feels about the other human, only polices should have this device because if the polices cought bad guys they will use it to them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e4d21a8f13c,710EFFD2AFE1,According to Prof. Thomas Huang this device can recognize the subtle facial movements humans use to express how humans feel. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+255652e89af4,710EFFD2AFE1,"However, this device is still not trust worthty ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+87bbd45e41db,710EFFD2AFE1,"because if this device did not tell the truth every would hate each other. A computer that knows when you're happy or sad is not good for humans. For example, if this Facial Action Coding System could be use in humans kids will not have go to school anymore because they will start doing something else. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3ab0e4b6fd9,710EFFD2AFE1,The Facial Action Coding System should not be use in anywhere ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a5af316dcde5,711483807C59,I think that tthe Facial Action Coding Sysytem or the facs for short is a great tool that could opne new door that were prevasily clouse befor. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a3bacb7caf8,711483807C59,We should take anvteng of this new tecnoligy to better help the people of today. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7707926961a9,711483807C59,Imeag you could tell if someone is facking a exspressen or forceing it with this tec we could. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+621bdf023e3c,711483807C59,We could detormen if someone daprise and help them or cipadiseing with them ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+639511796684,711483807C59,"One way the athur say in the text is "" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+340ba625f9ab,711483807C59,Not olny would this benafaet the studens it would be a great help for the teacher who can't tell can be a way of letting them now. And help the studen that are confused. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9894d57f8a16,711483807C59,"The text also say ""then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instctors"". That is one of only many thing it can do by helping the teachers by better understanding the classroom.
+
+It could do all of that by "" Classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness"" by accociated with characteristic movements of facial muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6864ecc72fa0,711483807C59,We could use this tecnogly more then just the classroomn like a better secroty system or a more exsprenol imeag to help doctores of what the pasent is feeling. That this tecnolgyn could work on pc or maby a phone is just mind blowing. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5f4fad4cf50,713EA4487525,"in the ""challenge of exploring venus"" the author says that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. He supports all his claims further in to the article. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+beb61eeb8c03,713EA4487525,"he says that it is one of the hottest planets even though its not directly next to the sun the pressure holds the heat in, its hot enough to melt certain metals ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ec12debb6628,713EA4487525,he says that scientists ar taking the risk because its so far the only planet that could have been just like earth in the past. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca4bfcbbbcb5,713EA4487525,"he brings up some of the characteristics that venus has that earth has too and he also brings up some of the physical features that makes them think there was living life on it at some point and time in the past. Our sister planet could have been covered in many oceans and held many kinds of life. just those little two facts bring the scientists in and make them wanna learn more about it. venus has rocky sediment, mountains and craters which earth all has. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fccae0c0d6ce,713EA4487525,in order to explore venus they would have to be very careful because how deadly and dangerous it could be ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e1ee7ca4f34,713EA4487525,they bring up a spacecraft very relative to a blimp that they would be able to use and study and explore venus from a very safe area without causing any harm to the scientists on board they would be about 30 or so miles above the surface area it would still be very hot around 170 degrees farenheight but do able because the blimps outer layer would keep the scientists from burning up or getting too hot . they are coming up with other ideas other than the blimp like spacecraft they havee also come up with the idea to send a roverthat is made out of silicon carbide that has lasted 3 weeks in venus like conditions. the scientists only want to learn more about venus mostly for its path and what it could have looked like and to make a breakthrough with some big news that venus was almost identical to the place we live on called earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7785ffde76e,713EA4487525,"as the author says in his last paragraph ""striving to explore venus has value not only because of the insight that will be gained but out of your normal human curiosity"" for the last point he says "" our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" which in total supports his whole statement of is venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dc9c0a6af240,714651DE19D4,"Remember thst one day you were sad ? Just never showed that emotion/ expression so you would not get ask ? Your apperence is never what you actually feel on the inside is it ? That is because face expression hids it all. Now there is a computer system that catches your human emotions.
+
+According to some new technonlgy named, Facial Action Coding, this system identifies humans emotions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+60d298c0e0f4,714651DE19D4,This technology is not the right way to find students human emotions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b18b2a8900ce,714651DE19D4,Facial Action Coding seems to just identify just your face. A face expression can hid your actual emotion ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+46185c4dd485,714651DE19D4,Systems like this have the chance to not be right. Make believe what this system is all about. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+150871e08657,714651DE19D4,"Secondly, the students expression may change during the day ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00a17cfa1760,714651DE19D4,"At some point a studnets can feel pressered after a class of even before there next class. These emotion have the accursy to not be the same during a students day. Calculating these emotion, can not be like working on a math problem. Emotions can change in the matter of a second. You just dont know what can happen at any minute that changes your expressions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c15c80445ca,714651DE19D4,"Lastly, this system would not be good to keep students emotion ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8d523ea9ae58,714651DE19D4,"It would be better to talk the student face to face, if you ever see or feel like something it going wrong with them. Like the article says you never know how your teacher feel when she is grading your assigment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a16b72990bbb,714651DE19D4,I believe the Facial Action Coding should not be used on students. I would rather let a teacher talk face to face with there studnets to see what the situation is all about. Rather then just guessing or coding there face and believe a system like the one that Prof. Thomas Huang invented.         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+abec8175fd6a,71A166CD0D13,the use of using cras less it a much saver ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b798e26d456e,71A166CD0D13,healthier to the air ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea66ae389fbf,71A166CD0D13,this essay is to imfomr felloe citizens about the advantages og limiting car usage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0b9dab0e4749,71A166CD0D13,"As it is stated in the passage Residents of the  upscale communtiy in german hav e given up their cars ""Street parking ,drive ways and home garages are geneally forbiddean in the experimental new district"". Car ownership is allowed but there are only two places that you can park ,large garages at the end of the development(2) ,car owners buy the space for $40000 alone with a home(2). Becaus of this 70 percent of the families dont own cars while 57 percent do own cars (3).""When i had a car i was always tense ,i am much happier this way "" said heidrun walter . Completed in 2006 is an example of a growing trend in Europe also the United states and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto life use  , as a componet of a movement called ""smart planning (4) "". Passengers cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emissions in europe ,up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the united states .  Past few decades efforts have been made to make cities denser and better for walking ,planners are nikw taking this concept to the suburs ,home to 5500 residents within a rectangular square mile .In this new appocah stores will be placed in a walk way  on the main streest rather then in malls alone some distant high ways .
+
+""ALL of our developement since world war 2 have been centered on the car ,and that will have to change "" (7) said david goldberg .
+
+Paris enforced a partical ban unpon driving to clear the glabal city ,almost 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters  27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction fine .Because of that congestion was down 60 percent in the captail of france ,the smog rivaled beijing ,china which is known as one of the most polluted citesbin the world. Diseal fuel was blamed ,diseal makes up 67 percent of vehicles in france while 53.3 percent are diseal engines in the western europe. The smog was cleared enough on monday for french party to recined the ban for odd numbers plates on tuesday. In colombia a program was set ,leaving the streets of the capital city devoid of traffic jams "". Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution "" , day without cars is an improvenment campagin that begun in the mid 1990's .Parks ,sports centers bloomed throughout the city ,uneven pitted sidewalks hace been replaced and so on .Recent studies suggest that americans are buyiinh fewer cars etc ..which left reserches poundering 'Has americs passed peak driving""? But americans love affair with its vehicles seemse to be cooling adjusted for population growth number of miles driven peaked in 2005 than droopend after that .Many meaures  the decrease in driving preced the downturn which is persisitinbg now that recover is under way . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89463c946be2,71A166CD0D13,if this pattern persists it will be benefical impliactiins for carbon emissions and environment. With all these changes people who stopped car commutin as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ad90d26038d3,71B6B3BAAD43,"""Venus, is sometimes called the ""Evening Star,"".
+
+Venus is a planet where life cannot exist because of it's life surviving and high temperature conditions. In our solar system Venus is our second plannet close to our sun. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fc30e1c7be52,71B6B3BAAD43,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pusuit despite th dager is presents. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+62117798488f,71B6B3BAAD43,There is a lot of danger in this planet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b45ceacb30b,71B6B3BAAD43,Life can't be found in this planet do to the extreme temperature of the sun which it could go up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit and 90 times more the pressure of the Earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4eb77b6cfe83,71B6B3BAAD43,"Why would the author think that studyng venus would be a good idea? According to the text "" Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like."" 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+244f0dce69dc,71B6B3BAAD43,"This show how the author that studying venus is a worthy.
+
+Another reason why the author suggest that studying venus would be a worthy pusuit despite the danger is that Venus was probably covered with oceans and it could be our nerest option for a planetary visit. According to the text "" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes famliar feature sych as valleys,mountains,and creaters. Furthermore, recall the Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crusial consideration given the long time frames of space travel"". This supports what the author suggets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99fa10ded50c,71B6B3BAAD43,"What the author suggests is something thst is really worthy pusuit the danger is presents because Venus could even become the next ""Earth"" in a near future. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+63bade827385,71BF2F475B65,By doing a Facial Action Coding to a classroom full of students would be different and interesring ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ef7cebbe5a6f,71BF2F475B65,This would be the first time anyone has done something that like. But the results could vary cause of how the students are feeling. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c2f17c52ec6,71BF2F475B65,"Say there is a girl who is having a really good day, she got asked to Prom and she said yes. It made her day and she was happy for the rest of the day. And then take a boy who was late for the bus and had to walk to school. He would be tired and upset. They both have two different emotions, so the results would be different. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3c6d3c63a5d,71BF2F475B65,"""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f00e7a87822,71BF2F475B65,"If a classroom did a scan and all the students were tired, not interested, and ready to go home, the teacher could take those results and make the class more interesring for the students. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+56c97414c254,71BF2F475B65,The students would probably have more fun and want to do the work if the teacher made it fun and interesting for the students. But don't make it too difficult for the students cause they could shut down again. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6793624329db,71BF2F475B65,"By doing the Facial Action Coding, the result could be different for some students. But it would be fun and interesting to switch things up a bit and have while learning. By doing the Facial Action Coding, you can see how the students really feel. And it cpuld help them and you (the teacher) get a better understanding of how to teach. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+519a2b76342b,71CF98E09876,The author talks about how the value of retuning to vanes is important and worth it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+853c3cc9edec,71CF98E09876,"The author say's vanes is the twin of of our solar systame. Venus is the closeist to see from the earth scood planet from the point in life earth . The author talks about that venus is the clostes to the plant to earth in the terms of density and size and occasionaly the clostest distance too. In the texts the author talks about approaches to studinng venuse examples, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaso of venuse surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. In the text it say's however peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safety far above of the planet can provide only limited insights on the ground conditions becuase most forms of light can not penetrate the dese atmospher. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2397326a9855,71CF98E09876,Its's worth it to study and learen about venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e725d676006,71CF98E09876,"you can see up close and learen about the forms of lights and the desenics atmosphere and standerd forms of photography and videography ineffective but there are risks like in anything you study or do in life there are risk's. In the texts it also says striving to meet the challege present by venuse has values, not only beacuse of of the insights to be gained on the planet, or on it' self, but also beacuse humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f96bcf8b2df,71CF98E09876,"
+. One thing shows you that studing venus is worth it is that you travel and you will meet the vary edges of imagination and innovation, travels on earth and beyone should not be limited by danger and doubts . ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0fe1fdd8cc41,71DF40C12652,I do not think that the use of this technology on the students in the classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3f655a08fe6c,71DF40C12652,I think this because we don't need technology to see how someone is feelings or to show us someone's emotions. We can tell just by looking at them that they are fine or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4480187a835,71DF40C12652,"Technology is used to much in the world. My question is why would we even use that technology, because later on generations won't be able to look at someone and tell their emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4e7dcb7f9e40,71DF40C12652,"In the story, the author gives an example of how we don't use technology to tell one's emotions. ""You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18122aca001d,71DF40C12652,"Even though, its a great invention would be even use it. Its not appropriate to use in a classroom setting. A teacher using that just to see what the kids' emotions are on the lesson. The teacher could just look at them and see how they feel towards this ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbd5ca6b114b,71DF40C12652,The teacher would probably say that it would be useful for that technology. Some students probably wouldn't mine ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+00e479384b67,71DF40C12652,but others would. Students don't like to show their emotions sometimes ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9216e700befe,71DF40C12652,"Then all of a sudden a teacher can just tell your emotions in a second. The students would probably feel uncomfortable, because the teacher can see how they are feeling. Feelings or emotions are meant for that certain person. That certain person can show off his/her emotions to other students around them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa5d23a6e794,71DF40C12652,"Also where would you even put the emotional expression technology, because having a huge thing in the front of the classroom would be a distraction. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf43857ab094,71DF40C12652,"That technology is also a distraction, because students would mess around with it when they probably aren't supposed too. Also the students would keep asking the teacher what their emotions are. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09c791c67155,71DF40C12652,"""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d7b4e732da3,71DF40C12652,"That quote sounds like its better than a teacher, because it can read the emotions and tell when the students get bored so they can change it. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+040e863e6812,71DF40C12652,"The invention would be nice, but not in a classroom settings. Its just not appropriate there ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e441589ecda9,71DF40C12652,"In the story, it makes you do a little motions with your face. This is demonstrating that the technology will use the muscular part of your face to determine your emotions at that current time. The technology is cool on how it works and operates, but reading the students' muscular emotions would not be right. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f29d2a7e48c2,71DF40C12652,"Towards the end of the text, they said they used it for a theatre thing. That is an appropriate place to use it, because you are supposed to show a lot of emotions there. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+025675ba2589,71DF40C12652,"Also they could read your emotions and help improve them because the technology told you what the emotion mostly was. The technology does reveal a lot about the science of emotions, but other places would have better use on it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e88beeef0341,71DF40C12652,"Some students like to hide their emotions from the teacher or other students. Some don't want people to know what they are feeling, because its their own business. Students wouldn't want their teachers walking up to them asking what is wrong, and the students said something like how do you know there is something wrong. Then the teacher says I used the emotional expression technology. The student would just feel awkward, because the teacher just figured out their emotions when they probably wanted to keep it to themselves. This is why the use of technology to read the emotion expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+78be90d2d03b,71E9F0BA4A2D,"In todays society pollution levels are higher than they have ever been. This is because of cars; every time u start up ur car you are polluting the earth . You may not can see it but it happens. There is a way to stop this though but it will take alot of time  and convincing, becasuse who would wanna give up their car it is such a easy source of transportation and some people couldnt go without it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8a9641c782fd,71E9F0BA4A2D,There is also a possibility that we wouldnt have to go completely without cars. We could go to electric or just find a totally different resource to run a car. I am sure there has to be something else than just gas that could run a car. It amazes me how we make all these crazy futuristic inventions but we cant make another substance to run a car. I think we should stop worrying about just stopping car usage completely and try to make something else that will run a car. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee9ba3432860,71E9F0BA4A2D,"""you now how difficult it actually is to find something as precise and accurate working as gasoline?"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+06933a8628cf,71E9F0BA4A2D,"Well yes i do understand that but if we all got the best brains inn the world together and tr to figure this out i most definitely think we can do it. Maybe we wouldnt have to just get the smartest people to help us, we could get everyone in the world to help us. Some may also ask ""well how do you expect to do that?"" well its simple you have to do the same thing we would to stop smoking SPREAD AWARENESS. Doing this would help a huge amount. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29fa42f142fa,71E9F0BA4A2D,"I think alot of people take the whole no car thing the wrong way, cause lets face it there no way we could go without cars. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3dfcab69ad29,71FD8098572A,"Have you ever just wondered if there could be life somewhere else from earth?
+
+If so then how about the face that they found on mars. Many people dont agree that it's just landform that built it's self up and just happened to resembul a face. Others would disagree and say that it is just land and that shodows were the main purpose of the enitre thing that made it look like a face. Why did the face on mars not look the same in 1976 i looked like a smilly face at first. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+654e88694bb8,71FD8098572A,When the picuture was taken it was taken in many different angles. That shows that there is a posability that the picture that they took at the time was in a way that made it have shadows an some sides. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbac6c08af37,71FD8098572A,"The camara that took it could have been faceing in the direction that the sun was shining and got some of the light make shadows on the landform.
+
+The scientist that looked at the picture taken by Viking 1 says it was only landform shaped in different ways. Makeing it appear like something that is not really there. Garvin says that it remindes him of a lava dome around the America West it's about the same height as the face that they found on mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+833392f53600,71FD8098572A,When they first took a picture of the face in 1976 it looked nothing like a face it only looked like a smily face and even that was hard to tell. After a couple of years in 1998 in looked like an oval shaped box and it was sunken in. And in 2001 is when started to shape into something over the years in changed and over more years it will change even more. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6b8be4727e4,71FD8098572A,"After that and so on because that's just what landforms do they change but, you can't always see the same thing you sole once. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb1a04f58463,71FD8098572A,I can see why some people don't see why it could be a landform And that its actually something else it does look like a face .it could actually be a statue and not just land shaped in to something but the thing is of it was really a statue or remaines of something or someone ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+57a5b32da0eb,71FD8098572A,"But,then why wouldn't it looks fuler or have actuale face there would be bones. And if there was a statues then why is it only it's head you would a lest find the other parts of the statue but we haven't and that's because it only a land form shaped into something almost everyone beleives to be actuale life. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+16623c7366c6,71FD8098572A,that object that was found on mars is only land built up that looks some what like a face and not a statue or remains of a living person or creature. but something that was a different landform a long time ago before it became what is know as the face on mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea09a6d7bb2c,72705C852528,I think that the Face is just a oddly shaped rock ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f6b8aebe4dc,72705C852528,"it probably just got there from sandy winds and erotion taking place on a mesa and that is what made it to be like that from, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d005b611d91,72705C852528,"from my experience with the Bible it says there is nothing else in the universe to do harm to the earth, except for sin and satin. The Lord thy God will never but something like that in the universe to do us harm. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f29ab2eed4ab,72705C852528,From th excerpt it says that at that time it was a windy mounth on Mars and from that I think that it got there from erosion ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+980e63b87f0e,72705C852528,"for atleast a couple hundred years it would had to be wearing away, because that huge of a rock can not possibly get worn away that fast but i guess since we found it like this a rock on Mars in the Crydonia and some how it lookes like a face, and over to the next century it would probably change and look like somthing else a new shape it would not stay like that for long. But it would be a cool conspicury to think that aliens make a cool looking rock formation of a Egyphian Pharoah known as the Face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2a7f059335a,72705C852528,Also from the excerpt says that it a a butte or a mesa that got eroded away over time ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9efdab2c4c7f,72705C852528,also if there was a alien life form on Mars we could see it because we have this high packed pixle camera that can take a photo of Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8ecc2aba29e,72705C852528,we can see them and there homes on our monitors the camera is called the Mars Global Suveryor an dby the intension of that shuddle we can see all things big or small. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42d4fa388481,7277DA6BE697,"The American school system is unfortunately still on the fall-late spring school schedule, leaving students their summer out of school. Although all students would likely agree that this off-time is beneficial, the majority of students experience a 'summer slide' where they lose knowlede they have gained in the past year, and get out of the habit of learning. As a remedy to this, especially in higher level grades, schools assign summer projects in order to help students maintain the mindset of learning. How these summer assignments should be designed is very important to how the students use their knowledge during their break. If students designed the project, they would likely find the projects more enjoyable, but risk not actually learning much in the process. On the other hand, teacher-designed assignments may cause students to lose interest and not work their hardest on their project. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cf3b18e11746,7277DA6BE697,"a teacher designed, but creative assignment, would be most beneficial to students' learning curve over the summer. By assigning something creative with educational merit, ",Position,Effective,,,
+0a4d10867e5e,7277DA6BE697,"students would enjoy working during their free time, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cf7a0b4ef13f,7277DA6BE697,"learn new things, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+554251bb274f,7277DA6BE697,prevent losing knowledge they have gained while they are on their summer vacation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4124cdcc05b9,7277DA6BE697,"If a student is assigned something they find boring, they are less likely to try as hard as they would on a more creative assignment. Also, if the assignment is more open to interpretation, it helps students think more creatively. Students would be much more likely to complete, and better yet, enjoy assignments that they find creative and fun. Meanwhile, a student with a duller assingment would not put their entire effort into it, and would surely rather be enjoying their vacation. By making the assignment itself more enjoyable, students would be 10 times more interested and likely to enjoy it. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb90fc2ea72b,7277DA6BE697,"Though the creativity of the assingment is paramount, the educational value of the assignment is just as important. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+00d71bcb59d8,7277DA6BE697,"In order to make sure that students can actually enjoy their projects, leaving it open to some interpretation can help a diverse set of students come up with individual ideas for their assignment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+96733cafcbbd,7277DA6BE697,"This would make it more interesting for everyone involved, and would also prevent students from copying each others' work, as well as helping them nourish their creativeness while they are out of school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+080868c0f49d,7277DA6BE697,"By making summer assignments creative, but still educational, teachers can prevent students from getting out of the educational mindset over their break, as well as help them enjoy their work as much as they enjoy their time out of school. Therefore, summer assignments should be designed by teachers, but still have room for creative and original ideas that will help the students enjoy their work and their individuality as they complete their summer work. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f6e00377ee27,727DE3CD0AEC,Luke has a certain point of view on convincing others to participate in this program ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5d3d26df8a6d,727DE3CD0AEC,Luke has this point of view because he thinks the trips were fun on board ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8976e8d8d227,727DE3CD0AEC,and he feels it opened up the world to him. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b543f8329e90,727DE3CD0AEC,It also made him more aware of the other peoples needs in other countries. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2eb335852fb5,727DE3CD0AEC,The awarness stayed with him and thats why he feels this way about other people participating i the program. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b782480558d,727DE3CD0AEC,"In the story it states that ""Luke also found time to have fun on board.""
+
+I think this helps his point of view because he is convincing others to go on this fun trip.
+
+The text also states that these fun activities or games helped them pass time.
+
+Luke's point of view might of changed by having fun and thats a part of why he is convincing others to participate. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd37f2d08340,727DE3CD0AEC,"In the text Luke said ""It opened the world to him.""
+
+The text states that he was grateful for the oppotunity. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c29fd01405c,727DE3CD0AEC,"It also stated that it made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs.
+
+The passage says that the awareness stayed with him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37d996db509a,727DE3CD0AEC,"Why he is convincing others is because he is trying to say that this trip will open the world to you and make you relize other peoples needs in different coutries.
+
+Luke's point of view convincing others to particapate is to show that he had a fun time doing it and he had a more understanding or awareness of peoples needs in other countries.
+
+He is also convincing you becasue he said that the awarness stayed with him.
+
+This changes the point of view by saying if you participate in the program then this awerness will stay with you and make you want to convince other people to participate.
+
+In conclusion Luke wants to convince you to participate in this program and relize the needs of people and to also convince other people to join the program becasue of what learned and what you understand know from the program. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9daba764d65b,72AC5F226827,"A planet that has enough heat and pressure to melt most metals and crush any submarine may not sound like an ideal location to visit, but scientists at NASA are determined on researching it because even though it has horribly immense climate, it may be the closest planet in our solar system to Earth. The article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author speaks of how scientists strongly believe that learning more about Venus can lead to answers about the creation of Earth. It is an extremely difficult task to accomplish, as most rovers NASA has sent there have not lasted more than a mere few hours. In order to research the planet in depth, NASA would need to send living humans to Venus, however, this will be rediculously challenging and even more so dangerous. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e5719456fc79,72AC5F226827,"Even though it is dangerous, the author makes a valid point, NASA should be determined to research Venus since the discoveries made there can possibly give insight on what Earth may become. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3f295fa6a2d,72AC5F226827,"Venus may have one of the harshest climates in our solar system, with an average temperature of 800 degrees Farenheit, and an atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than Earth's. Despite these major differences, it is also believed to be the closest to Earth by means of geological similarity. As stated in the article, scientists believe that Venus was most likely covered with oceans and quite possibly could have even hosted life. This idea is gathered from the similarities in structures between Earth and that volcano of a planet, like valleys, mountains, and an atmosphere. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5850199a6b5a,72AC5F226827,"All of these facts are provide the possibility of being able to make human contact on Venus. Not only would that allow scientist to further research what Earth may become, but if humans are able to reside on another planet, it would greatly help rid overcrowding and Venus may be a future inhabitable location for humans. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c4c70b4e314,72AC5F226827,"Obviously, the idea of sending humans to Venus far excedes our current technology, but traveling to that planet may be the future of humanity. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+51258737f89a,72AC5F226827,"The author states that the value of returning to Venus is indesputable, yet horribly dangerous. Danger should not put off scientists into further discovering that planet, but rather it should encourage them to work even harder in order to someday provide a safe passage between Earth and Venus. This would be beneficial to human society, because it could potentially help rid future problems of overpopulation and even provide insight on what Earth may become. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+91f47b513ecc,72AC5F226827,This all leads to concluding that the author made a most valid statement and provides evidence that provides wonderful reasoning as to why scientists should explore Venus and the benefits the exploration would provide.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fddf1e314254,72ECF408E30D,"The principal has decided that every student must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. For example, a student could participate in sports, work in the yearbook committee, or serve on the student council. This decision should be slightly changed so that it only applies to the students who do not participate in an extracurricular activity of any kind. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+769f8217e38a,72ECF408E30D,"After all, extracurricular activities are beneficial to students ",Position,Effective,,,
+1b2a7d547002,72ECF408E30D,"they perform better in the classroom as a result, colleges look favorably upon students who participate in extracurricular activities, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6e68b51fde1b,72ECF408E30D,these activities improve the health of teenagers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f98862b4f2fe,72ECF408E30D,"They are capable of thinking more creatively about certain questions, are more comfortable and as a result better when giving presentations in front of the class, and cna even perform better in Physical Education. Extracurricular activities, while not solely responsible for this, are a large factor that affects how a student performs in the classroom. For example, Model United Nations is one activity which teaches students about various useful skills, like public speaking. Students stand up in front of the entire class giving a speech, sometimes off the top of their head, on a certain problem affecting the intense world today. Model UN is not only a useful educational tool, however, as it is also capable of helping students think about the world with a new perspective. Many topics given are about finding better solutions to certain issues prevalent in today's world. Students come out of this club brimming with new ideas, self-confidence, and a will to learn. Sports are another activity beneficial to students. They learn skills such as teamwork, cooperation, and even get better sleep at night. One example of this is soccer, which teaches students about endurance and teamwork, all while helping them exercise. These student athletes are able to perform better in the classroom as well as in P.E. because of their athletic capabilities.
+
+College is a big part of life not just in the United States, but all over the world. By going to college, one can get a better education and in turn, a better job. However, just getting good grades in school is not enough for many of the top colleges around the world. Students also need a hook that make them stand out from the others in the eyes of the university. In fact, some colleges have given out scholarships to students for extracurricular activities. For example, playing a musical instrument, like the piano. Not only does this help with how a student does in the classroom, but colleges also look for students with musical talents and even partner with music schools for this purpose. In this way, not only can students attend a college, but they can also attend the music school that comes with it and pursue their musical education as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+63e48eadb980,72ECF408E30D,"Obesity and depression can both be linked to overworking students and not giving them enough time to go do something else. This is why schools need extracurricular activities. Sports and music are both helpful in this way. At a young age, many children are encouraged to go outside and participate in their local sports team by their parents. The parents do this so the children can get exercise and grow up leading a healthier lifestyle which combines academics and physical activity. Team sports, like soccer, football, or basketball, also teach students about teamwork and build up their self-confidence, which benefits their mental health as well. Team members meet each other just about every week, and over time, this relationship builds into a friendship. Individuals can feel that they belong in the team and treat almost like a second family. This sense of belonging benefits their mental health, which in turn benefits their performance in the classroom, which benefits their life overall. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5f2275d16455,72ECF408E30D,"Extracurricular activities benefit students in their performance in the classroom, attainability of higher education, and physical and mental health. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+155254f38c23,72ECF408E30D,"However, the specific decision of the principal should be changed as students may already participate in extracurricular activities not provided by the school. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bec93402d1ed,72ECF408E30D,"For example, one may take piano lessons with a private teacher, or play on a travel soccer team with no association to the school. By forcing these students to have to pick up another extracurricular activity that is provided by the school, they may become overwhelmed with trying to manage their busy schedules. Then, all of the positive attributes of physical activities fall apart. This reason is why the decision of the principal should be changed so that only students who do not participate in any extracurricular activity of any kind will be required to take one. Otherwise, there will be drawbacks to the principal's otherwise good intentions. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b97588cc501,72ECF408E30D,"the decision of the principal, while beneficial to the students, shouild be slightly changed so that students who already partcipate in an extracurricular activity outside of school will not be required to take one provided by the school. Extracurricular activities are beneficial to students because they improve performance in the classroom, help them pursue higher education, and improve their physical and mental health overall. Students should be given every opportunity to succeed, but requiring every student to participate in a school-based extracurricular activity would not be fair to the students who do so outside of school. They may experience certain drawbacks as a result of the tremendous workload forced upon them, and this may also lead to weakened mental health. For this reason, the principal's decision should be changed such that it only applies to students who do not partcipate in extracurricular activites of any kind. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ccd2a3d83ced,7323FA189167,THE PASSAGE IS INFORMING FELLOW CITIZENS ABOUT THE ADVANTAGES OF LIMIT CAR USAGE ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2bb753f39ffb,7323FA189167,"IN A WAY THAT, CAR OWNERSHIP IS ALLOWED,BUT THERE ARE ONLY TWO PLACES TO PARK LARGE GARAGES AT THE EDGE OF THE DEVELOPMENT, WHERE A CAR OWNER BUYS A SPACE FOR $40,000, ALONG WITH A HOME. AND UP TO 50 PERCENT IN SOME CAR- INTENSIVE AREAS IN THE UNITED STATES'' HOW MUCH YOU DRIVE IS AS IMPORTANNT AS WHETHER YOU HAVE HYBRID. WHERE EMISSIONS FROM AN INCREASING NUMBER OF PRIVATE CARS OWNED BY THE BURGEONING MIDDLE CLASS ARE CHOKING CITIES, IN THE UNITED STATES THE ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY IS PROMOTING ''CAR REDUCED'' COMMUNITIES, AND LEGISLATORS ARE STARTING TO ACT IF CAUTIOUSLY.
+
+MANY EXPERTS EXPECT PUBLIC TRANSPORT SERVING SUBURBS TO PLAY A MUCH LARGER ROLE IN A NEW SIX YEAR/MR.GOLDBERG SAID.IN PREVIOUS BILLS,80 PERCENT OF APPROPRIATIONS HAVE LAW GONE TO HIGHWAYS AND ONLY 20 PERCENT TO OTHER TRANSPORT.BUT IT'S BASIC PERCEPTS ARE BEING ADOPTED AROUND THE WORLD IN ATTEMPTS TO MAKE SUBURBS MORE ACCESSIBLE TO PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION.PARIS ENFORCED A PARTIAL DRIVING BAN TO CLEAR THE AIR OF GLOBAL CITY CONGESTION WAS DOWN 60 PERCENT IN THE CAPITAL OF FRANCE, AFTER FIVE-DAYS OF INTENSIFYING SMOG DELIVERY COMPANIES COMPLAINED OF LOST REVENUE, WHILE EXCEPTIONS WERE MADE FOR PLUG-IN CARS, HYBRIDS,AND CARS CARRYING THREE OR MORE PASSENGERS.
+
+PUBLIC TRANSIT WAS FREE OF CHARGE FROM FRIDAY TO MANDAY, ACCORDING TO BBC.STREET PARKING,DRIVEWAYS AND HOME GARAGES ARE GENERALLY FORBIDDEN IN THIS EXPERIMENTAL NEW DISTRICT ON THE OUTSKIRTS OF FREIBURG,NEAR THE FRENCH AND SWISS BORDERS.VAUBAN'S STREETS ARE COMPLETLY CAR-FREE'' EXCEPT THE TRAM TO DOWNTOWN FREIBURG RUNS AND A FEW STREETS ON ONE EDGE OF THE COMMUNITY.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+112ea1a488b6,7429789954ED,"In a lot of schools, students usually have to complete a summer project to continue learning over break. Most of the time, students have to read a certain, designated book and do a handout with it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a61b05bc2771,7429789954ED,These summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3f09729f6a2e,7429789954ED,it can be more enjoyable and creative. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0aade420893e,7429789954ED,Nobody looks forward to wasting their summer working on a school project when the whole point of break is to get away from school and work. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f68ec70e7bc0,7429789954ED,"It gives them the opportunity to think of cool ideas and to build off of them. Students will be more motivated to do the project if they get to choose the layout of it and design it all by themselves. When teachers give young adults the chance to do their own project, it makes every bodies project more diverse so a lot of people will not have the same ideas or layouts. Student-designed projects give young people more freedom and opens their minds up to the world of new ideas. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+15e32e215453,7429789954ED,"after having to go to school and doing work on a day-to-day basis, for about ten months, is exhausting. Once students finally get out of school, they feel freedom. Having a whole two and a half to three months of no school, no waking up early, and no assignments, is one of the best feelings ever. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+153bfec63ec6,7429789954ED,"teachers may disagree with these statements because they want projects that are easier to grade and go over. If a teacher is receiving over one hundred summer projects that were student-designed, he or she may feel overwhelmed and it may take a longer time to grade. All teachers teach differently, just like all students learn differently, so having teacher-designed projects for over the summer can be a simpler task for the teacher. Although teachers want students to learn over break by doing projects, I am sure they want a break too from grading papers and assignments or being flooded with them once school starts back up again. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+19e583dd6378,7429789954ED,"The end of each school year is the most exciting time for a lot students and teachers because it is finally break time. Having students continue to learn and refresh their memory over the summer should be a student-designed project so they have the chance to thinks of new ideas and be creative, while also completing the given task. Most students learn differently in many diverse ways, so having the option for a student to design their own projects with certain requirements, makes it a lot more motivational for the students and to open their minds to greater extents.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+11a5d7624591,747B06CF4DA3,This technology is valuble to the the classroom in my opinion ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fca1ca1fd723,747B06CF4DA3,I think that because it's good to calculate someone's feelings. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18ae606ffca5,747B06CF4DA3,"The part that got me the most was when 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' Dr. Huang predicts, I feel that's a good idea because some students are afraid to ask for help in front of the class. They said
+
+'the mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face' which is also a good thng. "" Theory of emotion , moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotion, but also may even help produce them' which is also good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9614b63ba051,747B06CF4DA3,"I feel like this would be great thing for science. You can do great, fun projects with this at school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b543a10d230,747B06CF4DA3,"You can use it with your friends. Knowing someones emotions without having to ask is a good thing. When feeling sad and nobody knows it but then technology comes and someone knows and they help you be happy again, or become friends. You can help people become more happy by knowing they're sad and make them smile. You can know what your friendis feelings or your boyfrind/girlfriend. Let's say you don't want to talk about how you're feeling so the technology helps you speak without having too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4aedc0b71e8b,747B06CF4DA3,We can have 'empathy' states the article so we might not have to explain ourselfs and explain how we are feeling about a certian soution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+add0385398c7,747B06CF4DA3,You won't have to keep your feelings inside forever. It's a good way to learn about science of emotions even said it in the article. I also think it's a good thing thing to have around kids/teens older people since technology is the furture ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c4315137338,747B06CF4DA3,This how I feel about the Facial Action Coding System. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ea8514b7dff6,749A62B003A5,"There are times where you feel like giving up and it seems easier to do so, but if you keep trying your best, you'll make it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cc5d1734e816,749A62B003A5,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" is suggesting that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dd201ed0c53a,749A62B003A5,"They are finding/testing new/old technology to get to Venus, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+67d90b3dd0a6,749A62B003A5,using what they know about Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d67e8ae1d20c,749A62B003A5,Venus is the closes planet to being Earth-like. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5534ac0ea2c,749A62B003A5,"To be able to land and survive on Venus, we'll need to find and test new or old technology. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+616272f434f8,749A62B003A5,"In paragraph 7, it says, ""some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions."" This shows that they are already testing new methods that could possibly survive on Venus. In paragraph 7, it says, ""Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers...system that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces."" This proves that they are using all resources that even date back to the 1800s. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af9b9ee94a45,749A62B003A5,"To be able to land on Venus, we'll need to use what we already know about Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00b826f6e6d1,749A62B003A5,"In paragraph 3, it says, ""such environment would crush even a submarine...and would liquefy many metals."" This shows that they know that what type of metals they need to use. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+858366d74b76,749A62B003A5,Venus is the closes planet to being Earth-like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10af34526147,749A62B003A5,"In paragrapgh 5, it says, "" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d67315bcd56e,74DAEA65F420,Keeping your mind working during the summer will help you get into the new school year better. This is why most schools require you to complete a summer reading list. Having schools give us projects during the summer will be fun. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9c38679d9d02,74DAEA65F420,I believe schools should have these projects be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+64b0cd4eefc5,74DAEA65F420,students would be more inclined to do them ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f2489c517f56,74DAEA65F420,it would be enjoyable. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f4e60aacfdc0,74DAEA65F420,"In my experiences, if my mom told me to do something I didn't want to do I would not do it to the best of my abilities. However, if I choose what to do it wouldn't feel as a 'must' but rather a 'want,' so I would take my time doing it. Students would have a good time doing a project they are interested in; they would be excited when working on it. Having excitement while doing projects helps you do better on them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0718f080d6da,74DAEA65F420,"Having these project be student-designed would make the students feel as if it wasn't a school assignment that they had to do on their summer break. I typically don't want to do school work during my breaks; so, if I had to choose what topic I would be working on, it would be more enjoyable for me. I will still be learning of course but I would be working on something I am interested in. Most projects that are teacher-designed that I get assigned to don't interest me, I dread doing them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+260bcb5c408e,74DAEA65F420,"If these projects were student-designed it would insure student learning, while also having fun during summer. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4a0881edef2e,74DAEA65F420,"Some people however, may believe the students would not complete the projects if it was student-designed. If the students did not know what to choose for their projects they may not even bother to do it. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2dd4cbe8d377,74DAEA65F420,Having to pick something for myself and not knowing what to do typically frustrates me and make me feel as if I don't want to do it. Having that much freedom may be too much for the students that often don't do their work. Restricting the projects to be teacher-designed will ensure the students to complete the projects and continue learning during their summer breaks. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+36303dc13d60,74DAEA65F420,"Making these projects student-designed will make the students feel inclined to complete them and it will be fun for them. Having to choose their own topics will encourage them to complete the project. Students should be having fun during the summer, it is their break for completing the school year. Forcing them to work on a topic they no not enjoy will not let them have fun. If students were required to do work during the summer, they should be doing something they choose to do.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb7cc2f1f3e3,7500A3088217,"In this world, we want to gain more knowlege to better understand what's around us.
+
+Now, scientists want to be in the next level of understanding. They want to gain more information about the Venus. Venus is also called,""Evening Star.""
+
+They know that it is a very dangerous thing to accomplish. However, they're still doing it anyway. The author even says,""Is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" He also said,"" To contribute meaningfully to our knowlege of Venus.""
+
+Scientists study many things, they explore many planets: Such as Moon, Mercury, Saturn, etc. But this, it's beyond what numbers of people to even imagine doing it. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0e04a6016b7c,7500A3088217,"In paragraph 2; the author help me relize, Scientists love challenge. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c80df000bcc4,7500A3088217,"The author said that, ""Since no spacecraft survived the land for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" They know more facts about the danger of this mission. This is what happens, when people set their mind and fucus, nobody can stop them. Still, they willingly to go, the fact knowing the ""conditions are far extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16a256af23f6,7500A3088217,Scientists believe seeking to understand is more crucial, despite the risks of dangers. They focus on completing mission that no human has ever done before. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+8527973efbb9,7500A3088217,"They were motivated by their own believes. They were inspire and get courage on their own ways. The author said,""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers an doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" It means learning and gaining knowlege should not be stop wether it was on Earth or beyond. But rather, increase it to the fullest to reach out expectation. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b74bb45b2059,7500A3088217,The author gaves us a way to accomplishes the impossible. It was by not giving up and continues to believes in how we started. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0d568cfff4b7,7500A3088217,"When gazing up the star, we were dazzled by the sprakled. But to look closer, it's a dream came true. We see how wonderful it was. But if we keep on imagine and never do it, it won't come true. Only, if we cast out fear aside and our doubts, then take a step forward. We know that we'll meet our expectation. This is what the author wants us to believes in. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0388e8c9c0fa,7507EC0790DF,"In my town getting your license is a huge deal. As soon as I turned fifteen I went streight to the DMV to take my test and get to driving as soon as possible. In countries and cities such as Germany, France, and Bogota, driving is ban pretty much where ever you go. After days of near-record pollution,paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city and as a result congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog. Smog flooded Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the entire world. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+45e71141caf3,7507EC0790DF,"
+Limiting car usage has numerous advantages from streets being safer than ever, to totally eliminating smog that drapes over the world today. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+e8f30029c4bc,7507EC0790DF,"Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions and desil fuel was blamed. we the people want to stop the pollution and eliminate it once and for all so the People proposed "" A day without cars"". It's part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. This campaign has seen the construction of 188 miles of nicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to the citys mayor. Parks and sports centers have beeen packed throughout the city, Sidewalks have been redone, rush-hour restrictions have cut traffic, new and more resturaunts have been built, and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.
+
+The end of car culture has hit everywhere and id just getting to the U.S.
+
+President Obama's goal to curb the United states' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient  shift in American behavior. Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewwer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. the essential question is "" Has America passed peak driving?""
+
+the United states had been long one of the worlds prime car cultures. But America's love affair with its vehicles seems to be cooling. when adjusted for population growth, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily after. As of april 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in january 1995.
+
+""different things are converging which suggests that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift,"" said Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University and director of its Mobilities Research and policy center. She cites various factors about how the internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet your friends. the renewal of centercities has made the suburbs less appealing and has drawn empty nesters back in. The rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexable commuting arrangements, inncluding the evolution of shared va services for getting to work.
+
+a study last year found that driving by young peopple decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009 and even car buyers are merely older or buying fewer cars in a lifetime rather than rejecting car culture outright. ""pedestrian, bycycle, private cars, commerical and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emmissions and improve safety.""                            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4bcfc46ba41d,75215659EBB3,The challenge of Venus. Venus is sometimes called the evening star why because it's one of the brightest points of light in the night time. The nickname evening star is misleading because Venus is planet its the secound planet of the sun ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+495d41c32cc8,75215659EBB3,Venus is a worthy pursuit. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1b30311f50a1,75215659EBB3,"Venus is planet not a star it the secound planet of the sun.
+
+Venus is a planet. Venus is often referred as Earth's twin Venus is the closest planet to Earth terms of density and size. Venus is occasionally the closest in distance to Earth. The diffrences of Venus is the speed sometimes we are closer to Mars then Venus because Venus is right around the coner ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f66c8b16df91,75215659EBB3,they have sent many spacecraft to land but not many have lasted a few hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a7e73e0e97ef,75215659EBB3,A thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On planet's surface the average temperatures is 800 degress Fahrenheit and the pressure of the atmospheric is 90 times greater what we experience on our planent. Venus has the hottest temperature of any planet in our solar system. Venus is blanket by a 97 percent of carbon dioxide and has the hottest temperature of any planet in solar system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b973c21006ef,75215659EBB3,Scientists are discussing further visits to its surface. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because its was once most like planet in our sytem. Venus can probably could been covered by a ocean and could supported various forms of life. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has been sending people to study Venus. Scientists still discuses about futher visits and NASA has send people to study venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9cd907695793,75215659EBB3,The author suggests that studying Venus is dangers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d39f966251df,75215659EBB3,Venus is one of the hottest planet even though Mercury is closer to our sun beyond the high pressure and heat Veusian weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes. So yes its dangers studying Venus many space craft haven't lasted hours in venus.  ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4c0ea2feab4,7534BB13F2D4,"The National Safety Council reports that cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year. That's out of control. America has an addiction problem, and it's all about cell phones. You see ads on tv, on your phone, on billboards, pretty much everywhere, and they are taking american lives. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa952e5afd6b,7534BB13F2D4,"There's a lot of problems phones bring to the table, but Americans getting distracted by them is one of the most common causes of death in the us. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+668e494e52ab,7534BB13F2D4,One quick peek at your phone and suddenly there's a semi truck coming at you 100 miles per hour. It can happen in almost an instant. And the numbers are there to back it up! There is no way more than 25% of the people killed per year expected or saw the crash coming. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6afa1c76b7fb,7534BB13F2D4,"The government has taken slow action, creating the ""hands-free"" law. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c485cef72f52,7534BB13F2D4,"This law makes it illegal to touch your phone while driving at all, but it isn't exactly being enforced. Sure, cops are now allowed to arrest people for touching their phone, but it just made people hide their phone better while driving, which honestly causes more accidents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30e1bac8526d,7534BB13F2D4,There are so many ways to fix this problem. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc9830225c9b,7534BB13F2D4,"For example, apple could make a feature where when your phone is moving above a certain speed, your phone locks itself until you have stopped moving. While Apple has a feature like this, it's easily avoidable as there's a button on the screen that opens your iphone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34019561b1c3,7534BB13F2D4,I hope these essays give you a reason not to touch your phone while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47728daf672a,7534BB13F2D4,"It's just seconds before you realize what's happening, and there's no going back when you cant even see what's coming. It takes little to no effort to put down your phone, and the same amount of effort to stop yourself from picking it up ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+807d3068ec5e,753E320B186B,"In my opinion as a student: I don't agree at this type of method but the same time is good for students and teachers to learnd everyday, life is like a school we never stop learning something everyday and acquire new expirence and skills in our grammer. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0e20fc96f265,753E320B186B,I should go neither everybody need their will to vote what they want to do or spend their summer break as they like. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b4fd06d8dbd8,753E320B186B,like you see is their break and is not fair to obligate a student to do a project with out a vote to give them a choice to pick if they want to do it or not. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+db68e20c2776,753E320B186B,"Example; like the elections a President can't be a President with out votes, the country pick their own candidates and the citizens give the vote to the person they pick best for their country
+
+Most likely everything have a vote in our community fuction nothing move with out a vote to people is fair to vote, that how it works  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0edcf5f59b0d,756C640A36D1,"The struggles in many peoples lives rely on time-related events such as work, school, and other priorities. These time limits have been built up through our transportation and the bumps that come with it. Traffic is an obvious limit on peoples time every day. However, if traffic was non-existent, how could these struggles be taken away? Simple, everybody gets to their destination without polluting the air or wasting time behind cars; walking or using a bike is the way to go. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6d2e0423e831,756C640A36D1,Avoiding the usage of cars has many positives ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8a6e1b0e7d29,756C640A36D1,being free from time constraints with transportation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c59ca030c577,756C640A36D1,being more active ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10fd497bcf48,756C640A36D1,"being an avid ""green"" human that is saving the Earth. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ac6e80277ef,756C640A36D1,"Traffic is all around us, whether it be internet or transportation traffic. The usage of cars has limited job arrivals because of the time that should be taken to drive to the job site. Yet, job sites should be centered around the employees as cars should toned down in the first place. ""... stores are placed a walk way, on a main street, rather than in malls in some distant highway."" (Source #1), this quote directly supports and addresses a problem that has been prolonged for too long. Restaurants, sporting good stores, and shopping malls have all corralled themselved in areas that are too distant for consumers to readily access ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc87d57ef959,756C640A36D1,"With cars slimmed down in numbers, stores would be in place for the consumer and the employee. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a57dad94f5b,756C640A36D1,"""...millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital eerily devoid of traffic jams."" (Source #3) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d23d78df1aa,756C640A36D1,"When being are more active throughout the day, occurences such as this are allowed to happen much more often ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dea36310bf5d,756C640A36D1,"Saving the Earth is extremely important and many people are aware of that. However, very few of those people take action. This is primarily because of the way our daily lives are ran. Work is a necessity to support for one's own and their families, so getting to work, whether by car or by bus, is something that will not stop. However, the alternatives of tranportation allow us to reach that goal without using gas-emitting cars or buses. Bikes and even hybrid cars are now rising up in today's society; ""A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009"". (Source #4). Young people have a strong influence on society and if they worry less about the car that they are driving or even driving at all, then there is certainly something going on. Cities are now also taking part in this action, ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city... Congestion was down 60 percent in the captial of France..."" (Source #2) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25912809ac1a,756C640A36D1,"A simple temporary ban can not only change the mind of an individuals view on using other alternatives for tranportation, but also allow them to experience those alternatives. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ef196020024,756C640A36D1,"The consequences that cars toll people with today are greatly weighing on an individuals daily life. They have their schedule built around their car and are constantly being time constrained because of it. The effect greenhouse gases have on the Earth is huge and has not stopped. In order to help the Earth in this parituclar topic, this action would be miraculous. Not only do many people become lazy and very unhealthy because of cars, but they also take for granted what they can do without them. Hiking and other activities are missed out on the daily because of these vehicles. Many people can accomplish new goals and set new goals if it were not for certain transportation methods.                             ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+81f361c39501,75818DBD4DA2,"In this article the author is showing how the monilisa shows alot of emion and alot of expression. The first paragraph stated that she is 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and two percent angry. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa021f926fff,75818DBD4DA2,For the most part she is happy you can tell she is happy becaus ehshe is smilling in the picture. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07589483c492,75818DBD4DA2,What you can not see is the other emtions such as disgust or fear or angry. So how can the author really say that she is all those things if she. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+13b26d0b1a2b,75818DBD4DA2,"although it could be a fake smile you never know. That is like everyday life a person could look happy but really be sad or mad about something you never really know how a person is feeling unless they personally tell you. Facial expression are a big part of our world. As the author states, ""Even though indivulas often show varying degress of expression for example not smiling broadly."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+333e99f254e9,75818DBD4DA2,What I stated in my paragraph befor was that you may tell somebody that your really close with you feelings but then be smiling or not showing any emtion at all ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+866e60072a2d,75818DBD4DA2,"The author states it later in the article. He states "" you can probalby tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face."" Us as humans have a hard time showing emotion or descrinbing our emtions . Although this painting is meant to bring a smile to your face it shows how much technolgy plays a big part in this as well. You can change they way somebody looks in pictures very easily ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5394e7ce7cf3,75818DBD4DA2,In our world today the technolgy is so wonderful it can changes images with the click of a button. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7d4e924c1a50,758703E5BF73,Summer break is a crucial time needed to ease tensions from the stressful life of a student. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+856d7add71ad,758703E5BF73,The responsibility of designing a project that is forced upon students during their time off should be held by teachers. ,Position,Effective,,,
+70aecd1ce92b,758703E5BF73,"When it comes to summer activities, completing a school project isn't one that comes to mind. If students are being required to do a project, then teachers should be the ones to design it. Creating projects and lesson plans, assigning work, etc. is all apart of a teacher's job. As employees of schools that require a summer project, teachers, rather than students, should be in control of the project elements. Doing this will give teachers the opportunity to have say in what their students are learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e1b35dd0cc0a,758703E5BF73,teachers should be designing projects because this will motivate students to put forth their best work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35958e6d1c85,758703E5BF73,"For most students, the end result of completing their work is more important than the process of doing it. They will go above and beyond to get the correct answer, but wouldn't do the same in order to understand why that answer is correct. If the project is teacher-designed, then students will have a standard to meet and will strive to meet it. However, having a student-designed project will create lower standards and decrease the motivation needed to complete the project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1aa421a2a87,758703E5BF73,"Being forced to complete a task, especially during a time intended for relaxation, will only result in sloppy work being done. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0a2b21e2eae1,758703E5BF73,"Although the project is intended for the continuation of learning, students are more likely to design their projects to be as simple as possible. Given the circumstance of it being summer and having to complete a project which is under their observation, students will do the bare minimum amount of work. The same cannot be said if it was created by a teacher. In addition, students are more likely to complete the project solely for the grade rather than the learning experience; defeating the whole purpose of assigning a summer project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43c6c7613cb5,758703E5BF73,"The burden of having an entire project to do over the course of summer is the last thing students want. This task is forced upon them by their schools. Therefore, educators should be accounted for having a well designed project to assign to students. The students already have extra, unwanted work to complete. They shouldn't have to be given the additional stress of having to design their own projects.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4d8d65262fc1,75A613E09762,"Mona Lisa, she's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. At least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions. Thomas Huang, the beckman institute for advanced science at the University of Illinois, working in collaboration of the Unversity of Amsterdam and his colleague are experts at developing better way for human and computer to communicate to each person or online. For computer can use homework research to recognize the subtle facial movement the human use to express how they feel about the computer's using in it. The fact, they perform this same impressive for calculation for every day. Most of them would have trouble their issue of describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried and etc. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a big smile to your face. By the way, making you happy face in this experiment also make you feel slightly happy to your face. Making faces could be reveal so they have a much of the science of emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4ef43b3fa20a,75AADDF98A77,What is so special about texting and driving? Is the person you're texting more valuable than your life? These are the two questions you should ask yourself before picking up your phone while you are behind the wheel. The statistics are out of this world people are dying every day because of distracted drivers. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+4b627e550a3c,75AADDF98A77,Texting and driving is very dangerous because during the time you check your phone your brain cells reaction time slows down and it causes a potential accident. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+232aa1f9fdb5,75AADDF98A77,"In 2018 4,637 people died in car crashes due to cell phone use. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4308941e527,75AADDF98A77,In my opinion I say that people should not use their cell phone while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+214d57d9e682,75AADDF98A77,"Texting while driving is a problem now more than it has ever been, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6801dc3e212,75AADDF98A77,"as 69 percent of U.S. drivers between the ages of 18 and 64 admitted to using their cell phone while driving during the previous month. Texting increases a crash by 23 times, it's a habit that must be stopped, across age groups and geographic locations alike. 40 percent of teens state that they've been in the car with a car with someone who was diving when using their cell phone in a way that put them in some kind of danger. While the maximum amount of time a driver can safely can change their attention from the road from is two seconds, it takes a driver five seconds on average to send a text message. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6cc9a786234f,75AADDF98A77,"Besides talking to your teen regularly about this issue and setting a good example by not using your cell phone while driving yourself, there are other simple ways to monitor your teen's phone use while they're behind the wheel. Start by activating smartphone features that help prohibit texting while driving. We need to take advantage of technology, utilizing apps that allow you as the parent more transparency into your child's whereabouts and driving habits. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8b29d0f627da,75AADDF98A77,In my opinion I think people should turn their phones off while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c01b51afc7a7,75AADDF98A77,In this generations words don't mean anything. Signs don't mean anything. There are signs everywhere that say don't text and drive but due to the research nobody is listening. Companies are trying to go around this rule by making a profit. What I mean by that is we say don't text and drive but here's an example apple air pods you simply tap your ear and say text so and so and in an instant your message has been sent to whoever. I don't think that's safe either in no way is texting and driving safe. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+0b17b2d37122,75AADDF98A77,Even if you try to make it easier ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+07db7698b78f,75AADDF98A77,in my opinion there is no way that it can be safe. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e42091ba7646,75AADDF98A77,"If you take your eyes off the road for even a second, the most dreadful things could happen. To many people die for that one text back that could have waited until you stopped or could have waited until you got to a red light. Many teenagers don't know that you could ruin your in literally 5 seconds. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+68148b55026a,75AADDF98A77,There is one case in which your life can be saved when texting and driving. There is a law called the hands free law. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+dc3bb392e6cb,75AADDF98A77,Texting and driving could either be paid with your life or a ticket. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+162760df30c1,75AADDF98A77,"In Georgia, the texting and driving ticket is the highest in the nation. If you get caught in Georgia that is a $150 ticket for violating the distracted driving law as well as one point on your driving record. The highest ticket you could be fined to is $1,000 in Iowa I think you're better off just following the hands free law. More money you get to keep in your pocket. Then to think about if you're texting and driving there's a possibility of you losing your life and a possibility of you killing someone else. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5836ed311cf2,75AADDF98A77,"In conclusion, Texting and driving is very dangerous but tempting. Teenagers are the most tempted to text and drive. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f09b8029ba0d,75C2D5CE58D0,"If your principal was asking you if you think it's a good idea that students must participate in at least one school activity, what would you say, do you agree or disagree. While reading this pay attention to the details that will be added about why students should or shouldn't must participate in school activities. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+19da06cd3e9f,75C2D5CE58D0,"One reason students should be forced to take at least one school activity is some students after school just go home immediately to watch television or use their phones,the reason this is a problem is because that isn't good for their heath ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6604f64be139,75C2D5CE58D0,"kids, need at least a couple of hours in the sun the reason being is the sun provided Vitamin D. Another reason is students eye sight could get worse by them looking at a screen all day. The final reason is some students are addicted to using their phones, did you know that phones can cause cancer? by students doing a sport or club this can limit screen time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df9ecb8e628c,75C2D5CE58D0,"it can make people widen their circle of friendship, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3919f12925e2,75C2D5CE58D0,"the reason being is when you talk to someone constantly you guys are immediately going to become friends. Another reason is students can become less depressed if they suffer from depression, the reason being is students who are depressed are founded to be more happy when their around more people they can talk to if they were alone it'll get worse which is why they should do an after school activity. The final reason is that students grades may improve reason being is, they might meet someone who can help them with their school work or even help them study. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d420425e63b5,75C2D5CE58D0,"students can start to feel motivated because in order to do a school activity you have to get good grades, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+14ec6ce00d07,75C2D5CE58D0,"so maybe they might start feeling motivated to have good grades. The final reason is students may feel more motivated to do their work because, after they go home they'll do their work so they can have a better grade. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ada539fb9376,75C2D5CE58D0,it can make students more motivated ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a1bfb8716cf,75C2D5CE58D0,"the reason being is, while students are doing an activity they are going to feel motivated to win or have their team win. Another reason is students will start to do things more organized or on time the reason being is, now that they have some motivation from doing an activity when it comes to doing this they are supposed to do, they might do it better. The final reason is students who don't have respect can most likely gain it the reason being is, when being motivated your behavior changes really quickly, so people who have no respect might gain it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d8b088873af5,75C2D5CE58D0,"I believe that students should have to participate in at least one extracurricular activity, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+170f05fe3c16,75C2D5CE58D0,"Some people may think otherwise, for example some students may think it's a bad idea for students to have to participate in at least one school activity ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d266847fd430,75C2D5CE58D0,while others think it's a great idea. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+0db59e43e79e,75C2D5CE58D0,"The reason some people might not think it's a good idea for students to have to participate in one school activity is some students might be stressed if their forced to do an activity they don't want to do, the reason being is, some people have social anxiety this means when put around people they tend to get uncomfortable, nervous, and maybe even cry because they have no clue what to say. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf98634ed5b7,75C4CC1ABECF,"One thing that connects students and schools all over the nation are the wide range of fun and interesting after school programs, known as extracurriculars. Schools offer lots of extracurricular programs that interest students hobbies and talents from sports, such as football or basketball, to clubs that help out and benefit the school, such as school council or leadership and unique clubs that students share a common interest in such as Harry Potter club or running club. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+37abfd14b9f9,75C4CC1ABECF,"Although extracurricular activities are just as beneficial to a students educational experience as in-school classes, students should be able to have the option to choose whether they would wish to participate in the activities. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a4307b9ba6bd,75C4CC1ABECF,Forcing a student to participate and serve in these extracurricular programs will deter the quality of the programs ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cb8dd5156ba1,75C4CC1ABECF,"decrease student welfare, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4be4de1aa7f0,75C4CC1ABECF,"make students even busier than they already are, leaving them no time for other activities outside of school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e5f385842108,75C4CC1ABECF,"If the option to opt out of joining an extra program is stripped from students, the qualities of the clubs can and will decrease ",Claim,Effective,,,
+501aae70827b,75C4CC1ABECF,"If a student chooses to participate in an extracurricular on their own time, the student will be excited and enthusiastic to engage in the program. Whereas if a student is forced to participate in a club or program, they will be the opposite, and likely will be put in a negative mindset where they believe that they are forced to be there. It's important for students to have the choice to participate to where students feel enthusiastic about the club and happy to be there. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3454b89c3a2f,75C4CC1ABECF,Requiring students to join an extra activity at the end of the day will also create unhappiness among students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+378bbdd8fad6,75C4CC1ABECF,"Students are already required to be at school and work for 7 hours a day and 35 hours a week. The extra activities at the end of the day can add on up to 4 hours of extra time to the already long school day, making it up to 50 hours per week. Some sports practices even go until 7:30 PM and also require students to meet on the weekends. Students are already exhausted and unhappy with the current school day, and forcing an extra 15 hours a week will have a devastating effect on the previously unhappy students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5a457d38f01b,75C4CC1ABECF,"Many students are involved in extracurricular activities that are not school sponsored and are run by an organization outside of school. If school forces the students to join an activity, it will take up more time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+35dd977798ee,75C4CC1ABECF,"It will leave students with no time for their other not-school related activities, yet another forced school related thing taking time out of the day that isn't school. Forcing students to join a club will create the same effect homework has on students. They will form a hatred for clubs, just like many students have for homework, because it leaves them with less and less out of school time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ce979e739a1b,75C4CC1ABECF,"In conclusion, schools should not allow students to choose whether they would like to participate in extracurricular activities because it can decrease the quality of the clubs, create unhappiness among students, and cause students to be even more busy and leaving students unavailable for other non-school related activities. Giving students the freedom to be able to choose whether they would like to participate lets students have more power. Taking away that power and putting just another thing thats forced on to their plate will cause students even more stress and discomfort.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d378e0f61e2,75C65F266CFD,"Im Evan and a guy at my work named John says that the Face on mars was created by alien's. I told him ""Its not created by aliens and me and others at NASA have proof"". He said ""show me the proof than EVAN!!!"". So I then went to get my boss and asked him if i could see the pictures and articles about the face on mars. He said i couldn't see them right away because he needed them so i gad a wait a whole day. The next day my boss handed me the paper and i was so exited to go to John's face and show him the facts. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ecbd71d38209,75C65F266CFD,The first things i showed him were the 3 pictures because it shows how it looked over all those years. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8da090635d56,75C65F266CFD,"Then i showed what NASA said, which was ""Huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7dc6584d520a,75C65F266CFD,"It was a pop icon, it starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!!! I told john ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+295c7bfad887,75C65F266CFD,Even only a little bit of scientists believe the face was an alien articraft.' ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b463bc21807b,75C65F266CFD,"Encountering the face on mars was not an easy task i told him, and they just don't pass over it very often said Garvin i told him. They even took other pictures where the pixel size was 3 times bigger so if there was other objects like aircraft or pyramids they would be able to see them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f838050c9af,75C65F266CFD,The face looks like Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a195dc4b0997,75C65F266CFD,"Then i asked him ""Now was that enough proof for you to believe me' and he said i'll tell you tomorrow. John went home and did research, when he came back he said ""yes I believe you now."" After that i was like want to be friends and he said Yes. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+bdbefbbedc60,75DD5C0C5050,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"", Is about technology being able to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c4e7900c8e59,75DD5C0C5050,I am arguing that it is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f60cf9ae074,75DD5C0C5050,it is a better way for humans and computers to communicate better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de35dca87f7d,75DD5C0C5050,"The computer can tell if you are happy, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness for example your orbicularis oris around your mouth tightens your lips to show anger. It is also vauluable because it can show your real emotion in a picture too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67a31e5ea2af,75DD5C0C5050,if any student wanted to know how the author was feeling at the time and it could also help them with projects ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+50e98a0c2132,75DD5C0C5050,"It also know what ads you want to see like if you smile on a ad that you are watching it will bring up another similar ad. But if you are frowning it will bring up a diffrent ad. Another way it help is that the computer knows when a student is becoming bored or confused, then it could modify the lesson for the students. And it also has good animated faces and more expressive for the video game.
+
+Which could help students in there career if they chose that profession. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33c3fc75687e,75DD5C0C5050,It can even indicate a real or fake smile ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+412795cebc6b,75DD5C0C5050,And if you practice smiling and frowning it helps you create diffrent emotions like empathy feeling someone elses emotional state. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6de0df460ac,75DD5C0C5050,who woulve known a computer can do all of those things. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b287c769419,75F4CDC7BB69,"The author does a pretty nice job at explaining all the dangers of Venus. The author provides the readers with all the information that is necessary, for the space program. Although Venus is dangerous, scientists are still willing to find out about it. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+556a02e083ca,75F4CDC7BB69,"The world today revoles mainly around science, and scientists will do what they have to do to get information. ""Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landinf for more than a few hours"" (paragraph 2). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46f1dbb69745,75F4CDC7BB69,"In the quote just stated, it proves that even if the spacecraft does not last more than a few hours, scientists are spending thousands of dollars on equipment just for some information but not much. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f7013154cf8e,75F4CDC7BB69,"In the next quote, some of the features will be listed. ""The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters"" (paragraph 4). Astonomers are working with everything they can at the moment. ""Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks"" (paragraph 6). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a31808e967ba,75F4CDC7BB69,"The previous quote is stating that scientists are trying no matter what the risks are. Also, scientists cannot completely risk their lives for safety purposes but they do their best. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a759016ca8a3,75F4CDC7BB69,"Scientists will strive to meet the challenges by Venus. It is believed that information should not be limited but risks should. If none of the scientists took risks for our planet, there would be no information about the past, present, or future. Scientists work and risk the dangers of
+
+Venus. Scientists will do what they have to, to support their claims.       ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b67a67f84f98,761E554AE3D8,"From the crammed streets of New York City, to the tourist-filled city of Paris, cars have been the means of transportation around the globe ever since their creation. The reliance on cars has been an issue too great to ignore, as the environment becomes more polluted and the streets become more dangerous. We must shed light on the dark tunnel that has been blinding our judgement to a brighter future, where pollution is limited and our streets are clean. That future can only be seen with limiting car usage. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7b14f2927658,761E554AE3D8,limiting car usage would be advantageous ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7a7a6dedd932,761E554AE3D8,it would better the environment ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6b146ea5392e,761E554AE3D8,"it would create a better lifestyle around the world. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c493c1017efe,761E554AE3D8,"With global warming increasing by the day, any step to reduce pollution and greenhouse gases should be taken, limiting car usage is an essential tool to head in that direction. As a Elisabeth Rosenthal from the New York Times expounded: ""Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States."" Clearly cars are extremely harmful to the environment. However there is hope, because once car usage is limited these high numbers can be mitigated everywhere. In fact, in Paris, as Robert Duffer from the Chicago Tribune reported, policies to lower car usage have been taken and have actually worked! In France's capital ""motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine. The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day."" In hopes to reduce carbon emmissions and save the environment, Paris's prayers were answered as the smog cleared enough for the government to remove the ban for odd-numbered plates. Clearly, the pollution reduced due to one factor--limiting car usage. If actions around the world are initiated similar to Paris's plan, then a better environmental future is inevitable. The environmental benefits of reducing car usage are endless. After all we only have one planet, cars should not be the machines to dictate our environmental future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+261b07af7047,761E554AE3D8,"Reliance on cars has shaped modern society into a dependent state on oil. However, once that oil runs out, what type of lifestyle will people turn to? Limiting car usage provides this answer through a healthy lifestyle before this day arises. For example, In Bogota, Colombia, as Andrew Selsky from the Seattle Times put it: ""the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths"" had been built within Bogota after years of limiting cars. People are shifting their reliance on cars and turning them into productive means of transportation. In fact, rush hour restrictions cut traffic and has led to a rise in parks and shopping districts in Bogota, according to Mr Selsky. Even Carlos Arturo Plaza a businessman in Bogota enthusiastically exclaimed: ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress..."" as he rode a two seat bicycle with his wife. However, Bogota is not the only place where limiting car usage has been gaining support, the Mobile World Congress has been engaged too! Bill Ford, the executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company laid out his plan where he envisioned a ""world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical or undesriable,"" (Rosenthal). He believed that ""partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emission and improve safety"" (Rosenthal). If people around the globe are willing to support this movement, especially a chairman for one of the world's largest automotive companies, and partake in this new lifestyle, then limiting car usage must be the way to go. This new lifestyle of riding bikes, walking, and taking public transportation, will mold the traditional transportation mediums, into a more safe and secure one if citizens support this advantageous movement. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+176b42dd72e1,761E554AE3D8,"It is time the citizens of planet Earth envision the streets of Beijing and the historic city of London, not as images of pollution and car-reliant places, but as clean and healthy ones. The advantages of limiting car usage makes this dream a reality, because this policy betters the environment and creates a better lifestyle around the world. Hopefully word spreads quickly, and everyone, everywhere, knows of the advantages of limiting car usage, because only then, will our future be a bright one. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eb59a20a47d3,7685070B6629,"Many teenagers have their phones as their top priority. Many of them are on them all the time even while driving. Texting while driving is one of many causes of death in the United States. These young 16 year olds don't understand that not only are they putting their life in danger but they are putting the person beside them, in front of them, and behind them in danger. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4670ac59af6e,7685070B6629,phones should not be aloud to be operated by a human in any sort of way while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8ca2cac4241a,7685070B6629,Teenagers do not understand the meaning of putting your phone down. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+58478c91c9fa,7685070B6629,If so many teenagers would just pay attention to what's going on around them they would understand what's going on in the world. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+82c6091e0832,7685070B6629,As a teenager i feel as so that if Georgia passed a law on hands free driving there should be more cops out. Cops are not paying attention to any of the drivers on the road. There is probably more people on the road texting while driving than speeding. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18e4c6376b3a,7685070B6629,More people die from texting while driving than actually getting into a harmful wreck not involving a phone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25c164681509,7685070B6629,Teenagers and even adults could care less about the people around them on the road and that is not how it should be. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9afde14579b0,7685070B6629,People should be careful while driving because driving is what everyone does and even if one person is on there phone while driving when there driving next to just think about how much damage that could cause in just a quick second. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e595ddd4cf92,7685070B6629,If more teenagers and adults cared about the people who are around them on the road than wrecks like this would not happen. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9f4977170db,7685070B6629,"You would not be hearing about tragic deaths on the news caused by distracted driving. If you realize it, there are more teenagers out on the road getting killed because of phones more than adults. I'm pretty sure adults got the hint when they realized that they were putting not only their lives but other people's lives in harm's way. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2a49ea0bfcc,7685070B6629,Phones while driving can wait. You only get to live your life once and so do the people around you. Don't think that looking at your phone for one second won't change anything because it could change everything. You can look at your phone when you get home or when your parked in a parking lot. Snapchat can wait and a text to your boyfriend/girlfriend can wait because your life and the peoples lives around you are more important than one quick text.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0f916164f841,768885A4B61A,"Participating in an extracurricular activity for school may be a lot of fun for example, yearbook club, sports, or gaming clubs. But going to a after school activity everyday can be a lot and extracurricular activities may not be in everybody's field. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+42aa1f05b8b8,768885A4B61A,The principal should not force all students to participate in at least one extracurricular activity ,Position,Effective,,,
+b75e72c59c29,768885A4B61A,"students may be busy after school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8943ee39970,768885A4B61A,"students are exhausted from school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b6f3900fdcf,768885A4B61A,the students are not interested in the activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0814ca1f78a,768885A4B61A,"Sometimes teachers may assign a lot of homework to their students. Sometimes if students have multiple teachers, the students may have homework from different subjects. Or students may have to finish classwork that they did not finish from class. Also projects can keep a student busy because students may have from 1 to 2 projects to do at home. Study guides also play a role because students may have upcoming test, quizzes, benchmarks, and midterms to pass. Some parents may own a restaurant or a shop and their kids may have to work at the restaurant or shop. students can also have tutoring, babysitting, other sports, and taking care of a loved one. However there are many more things that can keep a student busy after school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb50b9d00349,768885A4B61A,With some of these things going on in a students life it can be overwhelming by adding an extracurricular activity to their busy schedules. This is why the principal should not force the students to participate in an extracurricular activity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+07fce84eb21e,768885A4B61A,Students can be tired form the long 7 hours of school in the daytime ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5aa34943b613,768885A4B61A,Some students may want to go straight home from school to go eat and take a nap. Also when some students are testing all day they may want to go home and relax. However if the principal forces students to participate in extracurricular activities then they will be even more exhausted by staying after school for the clubs or sports. Some students may not want to stay at school for an extra 1 to 3 hours just for a extracurricular activity. students may have made plans to hang out with friends or go out to the mall. However if they are forced to stay after school then they would have to change their plans. This is another reason why the principal should not force students to participate in extracurricular activities. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+cc4f65ce0e1b,768885A4B61A,Not all students are interested in the activities at the school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f61231a3cbdb,768885A4B61A,"The activities at school may not be so enjoyable for the students. Some of the clubs that the students are interested in may not be available at the school. This is why the principal should make clubs that the students would love for example, a fan club for a popular book, a dodge ball club, or a health club. Fun clubs like these are what will make the students enjoy the clubs. But having boring clubs at school like yearbook club can be boring. Also adding fun sports to school like gymnastics or cricket would also bring the students happiness and would make them want to do extracurricular activities instead of the principal focing the students to participate. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5bd55103b814,768885A4B61A,"As a result, students are busy after school, students are exhausted from long school days, and students are not interested in the activities at school are all reasons why the principal should not force students to participate in extracurricular activities. Students have lots of other things to do after school, students want to go home after a long 7 hours of school and do not want to be at school for another 1 to 3 hours, and lastly students are not interested in the extracurricular activities at school because they are boring.                               ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6a302d2c3cb3,7699AA6DF309,I think that the auther is right about studying venus is worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ddd12b58b77,7699AA6DF309,"because if Venus is so close to the sun it and is one of the hottest planest because is close to the sun, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life just like the Earth. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e01508e4825d,7699AA6DF309,"Venus is similar like the earth they have valleys,mountains,and craters. But we don't know if they have food. they mayhave alliens because of the tempertures. And it can be dangerous to the Earth because we are the closest one to Venus.
+
+scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contibute meaningfully to our knowledges of venus.
+
+NASA has the power and money to send people and invest about all these things.
+
+NASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.
+
+NASA's posssible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to flot above the roiling Venusian landscape.
+
+Or maybe Venus is just a start because of his nickname and is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky.
+
+Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,even though Mercury is closer to oour sun.
+
+Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present addicional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent ligtning strikes to probes seeeking to land on its surface.
+
+NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to flot above the fray.
+
+Venus i the closet planet to the Earth in term of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance to. Should be more easy to study but the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission.
+
+we should invest if in Venus exist phone or tablet or system that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces.
+
+we all have questions like ""if Venus move around just like the Earth does"".
+
+We all want to konw ""if Venus produce live"".
+
+we should keep invest why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus
+
+The temperature that Venus has is too hot for humans is more extreme that anything and the weather present additional impediments like erupting volcans.
+
+Why venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc69df8f6470,7699AA6DF309,"My conclusion is that yes we shoud study Venus because it may have humans been in their planet, because they have water,sun,just like the Earth does. and our travels on Earthand beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubst but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. And sent more people to Venus and see what they have as a planet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99dea7fd46d8,76C3430373A4,"Venus the evening star since its the brightest point of light in the night sky. Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world and each missiion was unmanned since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and nvere touched venus in more than tree decades. The thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and the clouds are even more challenging since their is highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere and on the planet surface temperatures average is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience on earth and the environment would crush even a submarine. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported forms of life and has familiar features suah as valleys, mountains, and craters ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d0e212212ec7,76C3430373A4,In conclusion if we could possibly bulid something to survive venus we could find some amazing things like if it ever ahad water and find maybe remains of past forms of life. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e685c2dd14a0,76CDE9069DBE,Summer projects are seen as a way to make sure that students are learning. These summer projects are usually teacher-designed. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4251e2d8199d,76CDE9069DBE,It is a valid opinion to believe that the projects should be teacher-designed. There are many reasons for the projects to be designed by teachers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5b4c3897edb8,76CDE9069DBE,The students could easily pick simplistic projects that do not give them any type of learning experience. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44ca9d821026,76CDE9069DBE,Teachers know more about the topic and could give them different ways of learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5adde84afed6,76CDE9069DBE,students can easily forget to do something when they are responsible for the outline or design for an assignment that is usually given and made by a teacher. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5402a767f88d,76CDE9069DBE,"Students over the summer usually want to save time for leisure activities. When the idea of school comes into the minds of these students, it can be seen as agitating. When you add the freedom to make your own project the way you want, there can be downsides for the student and the teacher ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92f2cfd3a9f9,76CDE9069DBE,"As a teacher, it should be necessary to keep your students focused on the topic that is at hand. Some teachers will even go out of their way to do this by giving a project over the summer. Many teachers give these projects to students with additional options designed by them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0590981afd2b,76CDE9069DBE,Responsibility is a necessary thing for students to have. But it is very common to find students overwhelmed with this new found freedom ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3585d956508,76CDE9069DBE,Many people forget to do things when it is necessary for them to do it without guidelines or specific criteria they have to meet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9191f2d2701,76CDE9069DBE,"Sometimes it's not that they forget, but that they are totally frustrated with the idea that they have no assistance on the project. This could be especially troubling over the summer as students are more focused on enjoying their break. The idea that they have to do something on their own without any prior information can be overlooked. When doing a project for a pre-IB class I found that it was easier to do when I had guild lines to measure up to and it wasn't just a time for me to implore on my creative talents in order to get something done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4ef4f414635,76CDE9069DBE,"Summer projects are something to make sure students keep learning over their break. It's clear to see that teacher-designed projects are much more efficient. Without the guidance of teachers, students could make simplistic projects that offer no benefit for the teacher or student. The teacher's knowledge about the project could make it helpful for their students to keep learning different ways about the material. It is also common for students to forget or lose interest when they are given too much responsibility for an assignment. Student-designed projects can leave room for a large quantity of errors and mistakes that could ultimately defeat the purpose of a project. Therefore, teacher- designed projects are better in the sense that they can keep the student learning as if they are still in school but give them time to enjoy the benefits that come with summer break.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e4d2bd0ffb3c,76D43DB8CC85,Cars have been producing smog and causing problems with countries ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+79973137d0c1,76D43DB8CC85,"Therefor countries such as France,Germany,and Bogota have been making national days where vehicles are not allowed to be driven to reduce smog that diesel engines produce. This international day in these countries have enforced the use and caused a 25$ fine to must users prices can range. Also scientists in the U.S have started to notice the decline in vehicles bought,after all America was the maker of the first vehicle the ""Model T"".
+
+But in France the smog was getting as bad as China and Beijing. France was one of the worst countries for smog out of most European capitals it was compared with Brussels and London and its numbers toppled them over with one hundred and forty seven micrograms unlike Brussels with one hundred and fourteen and London with seventy nine point seven. Delivery companies were complaining of the lost revenue. While there were some exceptions made for some plug in cars which had capabilities of carrying three or more passengers public transit was free of charge Friday through Monday.
+
+In the country Columbia cities such as Cali and Valledupar have taken work in the event to reduce smog people were riding bikes and even if it rained they really didn't mind it. This event has reduced rush-hour traffic sidewalks refurbished with smoother ones, new restaurants,and even new upscale shopping districts. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae3e9b62470b,76D43DB8CC85,The shifts of car business in America have gotten car dealerships to worry about how many people are buying cars from dealerships due to the fact there's hybrid vehicles coming out which  lowers the use of gas and pollution on most vehicles such as the prius. There has been studies to show that young people that drive have decreased by Twenty three percent. Also another reason is that kids are able to carpool with friends or take local transport such as buses or taxis which limit the needs for a car.             ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+63c4501c72bc,77013FCECE6F,Being a part of the Seagoing Cowboys was a great experience. I had no idea that it would be as much fun as it turned out to be. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a54a2c9a518,77013FCECE6F,witness extraordinary places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb479cfc95d9,77013FCECE6F,able to help others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11d28a685cc8,77013FCECE6F,I had a great deal of fun on my trip ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96a455feb91b,77013FCECE6F,It gave me an opportunity to see many countries ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ef02363a1ed,77013FCECE6F,My down time was not the most important part of the trip though. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+761aaa3d628b,77013FCECE6F,"It also gave me an opportuntiy to aid others as well as animals, who's homes where left in ruins. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5254c247a33b,77013FCECE6F,"Extensively, I would recomend this as a career path to any who are interested. The years that I was a Seagoing Cowboy, were a great few years in my life. I am very proud of the choice that I had made to do it. This choice changed my life in most every aspect. It opened my eyes to the world and could do the same for you. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e30a858c72b,7742D58270C9,"Everyday people die in car accidents because they use cell phones while driving. According to research cell phones are leading factors that cause accidents. Studies show that a cell phone put drivers at a four time greater risk of a crush. Despite of a danger, people still use cell phones because they want to be always available and keep in touch with other people. Also, they think that hand-free set is safe because they can drive using two hands. Moreover, they use arguments that cell phones are necessary in emergency situations. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+940145657e2d,7742D58270C9,"Although some people support using cell phones while driving, there are evidences that they are dangerous and people should avoid talking while driving. ",Position,Effective,,,
+2039f6432f1c,7742D58270C9,cell phone like lawyers or businessmen say that they always have to be available to answer the phone to keep their business runni ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c12e0c64afd9,7742D58270C9,"Therefor others of their habits, they can create dangerous and hazardous situations like a collision or an accident. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f5f78b69f005,7742D58270C9,Business issues can be stressful and dangerous while driving because it can cause emotional reactions that can lead to tragedy. Because of the conversation they might get upset and this can lower their driving ability that can lead to lose control over the car. So if people don't make a decision to put away their cell phones their routine can harm innocent people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+900bdebaf963,7742D58270C9,Opponents say that hands-free set is safety because people can drive using two hands. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+35db686d945e,7742D58270C9,"However, hands-free devices don't eliminate the risk of causing an accident and even may it worsen by suggesting that the behavior is safe. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9b6f7a5a0a72,7742D58270C9,"Researches show that using headset can be as dangerous as holding a phone because the conversations distracts drivers from focusing on the road. Scientists had proven that people talking over the phone image person who they talking to and that doesn't interfere with driving. The problem is when a car swerves unexpectedly or pedestrian step into traffic, and the mind lacks the processing power to react in time. So the problem isn't in holding the wheel and cell phone at the same time what may cause an accident because of lack man oeuvre, it is because of conversation and lack of reaction at the particularly time. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dee3f8aec4fc,7742D58270C9,Opponents say that cell phones are good because they give an opportunity to make a call in case of emergency. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+fea4674d31a9,7742D58270C9,So i believe that people shoudl be able to have there phones people just need to be more respinsible of how they use them.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+218598f1055e,7794085FE26D,"Students go through a stressful school year with plenty of assignments, projects, and homework. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9f3747b1b935,7794085FE26D,Therefore when summer comes around summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d87e4507df19,7794085FE26D,"students would still be able to enjoy their summer with a project of their choosing, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f17848d7e762,7794085FE26D,"students will be able to display their creativity in their project, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+62db53e926f2,7794085FE26D,students will finally be able to design their project after a school year of teacher-designed projects. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fea810376f02,7794085FE26D,"
+Summer projects should be student-designed because students would still be able to enjoy their summer with a project of their choosing. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+33df095001bb,7794085FE26D,"Students could enjoy their summer with this project because they are doing something they're passionate about. This will benefit students because they tend to put more effort into something they want to do. Also for students doing something they want to do, they strive to succeed and they'll choose something that they're comfortable with. In addition students could still enjoy their summer because of the stress it takes off of the student for them not having to go out of their comfort zone to complete another project subject that they have no clue about. The stress taken off students for the summer is beneficial because it gives them an energetic start to the next school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4d6f5309ae5f,7794085FE26D,In addition summer projects should be student-designed because students will be able to display their creativity in their project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4798c3cc7f3e,7794085FE26D,"A student-designed project allows a student to show their creativity because they're making it their own. For example a teacher-designed project could be about the ocean and each students work will be very similar because they're all talking about the ocean, but with a student-designed project it will display the difference between each student within the school. Also students being able to express their creativity allows each student to be their own. This benefits the school and the students in it for it could create bonds between students that share the same likes and dislikes, let the teacher and adults get to know more about the students, and helps shape the diversity within the school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+165e46cf4d82,7794085FE26D,Finally summer projects should be student-designed because students will finally be able to design their project after a school year of teacher-designed projects. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+16033fddd78d,7794085FE26D,"This would be enjoyable for students because they get tired of completing assignments and projects that have nothing to do with their life or what they like. So for once a student-designed project would allow the student to finally do what they've wanted to do. In addition it will limit the amount of research and the extra work that goes into doing something that you're not familiar with, which leads to peaceful learning and a peaceful summer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a08df9deb50,7794085FE26D,"With limited extra work and limited research it may make one think that they're not really learning, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5f570205b10b,7794085FE26D,but they are and it teaches students a different skill when they're designing the project. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+308ddf9e449a,7794085FE26D,In conclusion it would be beneficial to both students and teachers if summer projects were student-designed because it will remain that students still have an exciting summer while being creative and finally being able to do a student-designed project. So therefore during the summer the only projects that are given should be student-designed so that it will remain intact for students to have a stress free summer for while they're still completing academic activity.                       ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a922707a13a4,779F2D5A9B6D,limiting car usage is no easy take considering that peoples jobs are more than a half an hour away in some cases. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5b40be3249b9,779F2D5A9B6D,what we could do is replace gas cars with water or oil solarpowered cars. what we can do is replace the road with heat sensor pannels and replace the cars fuel line with eigther a solar based power syatem or used water for the fuel supply. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1ed9b4813ed9,779F2D5A9B6D,"the heat/friction sensor pannels will produce enough electrical energy to power builds, appartment complexs, houses, or even recharge a battery with in seconds.
+
+the way we live now we can do all those things its just people dont know how to use there brain and come up a cleaner source of renewable energy. this entire project could be free and go world wide as long as everyone in the world can a agree this is perfect replacement to fossil fuels. if this document could get the th government somehow ican change the world for the better and probably save our poluted earth from destroying its self. i could fix the green house eeftect on the earth and you could clean up radio active polution by not useing gas powered cars. our erath could go back to a clean slat where there is no polution made by toxic fumes in the atmosphere and destroyed rivers and lakes. everything could be fixed by one simple thought of a childs mind. if only adults knew how to listen to there own words that they teach us with how to listen twice as muchas they speak. ifthis country has the right to freedom of speech then i think my idea isworth telling the world about. and not keeping my mouth shut. i should be speaking on air to the world not in my house being yeld at by my parents becuase what i want to nobody wants to hear. if anyone gets to read this please immediatly take to someone important that would love to here my idea. thank you.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cabaf2ca6103,77C40DA262AC,Cars in our society has been a benefical invention that we've had. Now that we are living in the 21st century people are worried about the negative effects that cars are contributting to. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6fdebc8b5727,77C40DA262AC,If we limit the use of cars ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8a1ed736da1a,77C40DA262AC,"it takes away stress from drivers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e590eb71682,77C40DA262AC,"it reduces air pollution, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+da9e15e0f048,77C40DA262AC,avoids many traffic jams we have on daily basis. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d629eb7e4ed8,77C40DA262AC,"Although, life can be hard without cars ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7b5886ea0441,77C40DA262AC,their are several other ways to get around without harming our enviornment. One option we should take into consideration is walking. A little excersise doesn't harm anyone so why is it that since we have cars no one really walks anymore. If the human population in 1812 walked so can we. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fa2dd676b18c,77C40DA262AC,"You're in constant fear of people crashing into you,running a red light,running out of gas in the middle of the highway/street. Thw whole concept of driving is stressful enough for me and I don't even drive yet. If we limit the use of cars in our community it reduces lot of unecassary stress. The first source talks about a German residency where cars aren't permitted and if you own a car you can choose to buy a space for it which costs $40,000. Vauban (German residency) is home to 5,500 residents and only a few on them own car. ""In this approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway."" The thought of having one main street where everyone can access all they need is a genius idea becuase it basically forces people to walk and it reduces the use of cars which lowers stress. We shouldn't stress about cars becuase owning a car isn't a right, it's a privelage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3413c665f205,77C40DA262AC,"""On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31)."" Source number two states that the reason why this did this Paris was because of intense smog. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55e028e5183a,77CF3644F240,"In the article "" Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the new technology called "" Facial Action Coding System,"" would identify human emotions. In the first paragraph the author is telling you about Mona Lisa and what the doctors are trying to tell others. The software is almost like yourself talking to a person and knowing their emotions, but in a computer. Dr. Paul Eckman and Dr. Huang are working together to see how to work and use the latest innovation. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8243efdbe84c,77CF3644F240,"Some are asking questions like "" Can we actually calculate emotions?"" or "" How can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express our emotions?"" I as of the rest of the curious world would want to see how this new technolgy works. Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman are working to make this to only bring smiles to someones face each day as shown is paragraph six. Dr. Huang believes that students doing homwork on a computer usually become more bored while doing something boring on a computer, so Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman want to have a computer know about your feelings like people do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d1a1ff0fff0,77CF3644F240,As shown in paragraph eight muscles show that some actions might show others that you either have a forced smile or an genuine one. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16d3f12fce78,77CF3644F240,So letting computers know how you feel and helping you genuinly smile would help your day and help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d4c9cd62b14,77CF3644F240,"Both Drs. know they had helped sombody have a better day. When you smile to show ""Mona Lisa Smile"" to the computer it will show an add appearing on your screen and then a similar afterwards. If you frown the ad will be different after the first one proving that you aren't happy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93c8714851fa,77CF3644F240,The new software could help others become more energectic and happier on most days other than frowning and having an awful day. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a13b9a385f1c,77CF3644F240,Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman are proving to the world that increasing happiness will help other feel better on a daily basis and want to do more.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+82bbb244e49e,77E7C5CFF241,In the story making mona lisa smile the author talked about some very intersting new technolgy for computers. the new technolgy can tell if someone is happy or sad ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+14251715bdef,77E7C5CFF241,the new technolgy would be very valuable for school class rooms in this day and age. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f9b890c3fc8,77E7C5CFF241,there are alout of ways that the new technolgy could help both studnts and teachers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+970513f9194b,77E7C5CFF241,The resone paragraph six is very helpful it talkes about how the new computer technolgy can tell if a student is becoming confused or bored or also if the student needs help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d055c4aa108,77E7C5CFF241,"the way it can help students is by making the lession less or also giving more exampls to help the students understand. also as a student this would help alout since some students are kinda shy when it comes to school.
+
+there are not alout of students that like to ask for help. the resone some students dont like to ask for help is becuse they may not know what or how to ask the qustion or if they need help. this is where the new technolygy can come into play. this can get the student help or also make the lesson shorter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a7d64b17fbf0,77E7C5CFF241,The resone paragraph nine is so important is that is talkes about the diffrent emotion adds can make us as humans fill. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65e4b18174f9,77E7C5CFF241,"it also talks about the difrrent adss that can be shown.
+
+lets say if it sees that your sad it will show you a funny add to make you happy.
+
+that is one resone that it can tell if your happy or sad. this would also make alout of people have a good day if they didnt have the best day to start out with. that is how the new technolgy can help and also make people have a better day. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6e75b034413,77E7C5CFF241,This new technolgy should be on all school computers. the resone why it should be on all school computers is that this could make the students in the schools better at learning and also happy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+913553be9ccc,77E7C5CFF241,"that is why this is a possitive and also very helpful system to have on computers.
+
+this would help the shy satudents that dont like to show emotions or also that dont like to ask qustions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6e5cb060ea2,77E7C5CFF241,so lets put this new computer technolgy to work and lets put it on every school computer. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+98a0e36094d2,77F943B02A60,This is my deatlis to back the witer on his claim how how studying venus is both worthy and dangerousand to explain how the author backs himself up on his claim. He gives alot of good points ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9bbd3529c586,77F943B02A60,huge point that stood out to me was wehen he said how venus is sometimes called Earth's twin ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55eeeb79706e,77F943B02A60,becuase in distance venus is the closest planet to us in denstity and size so pretty much Venus is a mini Earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d9bd2d8f151,77F943B02A60,Another thing that the author toched on is that Venus nickname The Evening Star ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c1f634758eac,77F943B02A60,the writter put that piece of info about Venus becuase he is explaing how Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky which makes it simple for anyone to spot even a simple stargazer. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+22f79966f75e,77F943B02A60,The last point of evedince the writter used to suppports his claim is the dangerous part oif hsi calim ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7076d89f4102,77F943B02A60,he said that NASA has been studying how they are goinhg to send humnas to study VEnus but the dangerous part of that mission is the surface conditions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+381d074b5c73,7804C4E627BF,"Venus is a interesting planet cause of its Evening star which it a bright light and is a second planet of the sun when you look at Venus the density , size and distance gets the attention till where you want to discover the parts and ideas of it. the diferences about a spacecraft is that people wanted spacecraft to land on earth but it didn't work due to no survival that couldn't land more than a few hours thats why this planet is challenging for humans to study the reputations want people to be confused and get the meaning of this. Atmosphere is thick 97 percent carbon dioxide so temperatures goes up 800 degrees F and on earth the atomsphere is 90 times greater.
+
+Sister Planet and Venus are the same thing its the better planet in the solar system which used to be covered in oceans and could supported peoples life just like the Earth. its rocky sediment and has features which are valleys, mountains, and craters.
+
+NASA is working on venus the samples of rock, gas etc. are not working to take the samples its rough so a scienctist knows thay venus needs to be close to do their own vperonsal depsite risk for it to last. NASA working to get other people to study this and have advice. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f2442203ef5,780F45FB6F2D,"I'll tell you reasons why you shouldn't use your phone while driving. Then, I'll explain to you what can happen to you if you use your phone while driving a vehicle. Afterward, I'll tell you the kinds of consequence you can receive from the situation. Finally, I'll give you examples of why it's a bad idea of using your phone while driving. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0ea95e248619,780F45FB6F2D,Should you be using your cellular device while driving a vehicle? In my opinion you shouldn't use your phone while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f5a24d2f92bf,780F45FB6F2D,You shouldn't use it because you can get distracted easily. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b32edd97274,780F45FB6F2D,Never know what can happen you might pass a red light and cause an accident. Phones shouldn't be use for texting nor calling but you can use it to get somewhere. In case you don't know where it is you can use your gps but that's it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69a1e449d8bf,780F45FB6F2D,Reasons why you shouldn't use your cellphone. To begin with it's against the law to text and drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64117fbe5248,780F45FB6F2D,"Secondly, you can cause an accident you never know what can happen when you don't pay attention. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ee8d56ab9a0,780F45FB6F2D,You might pass a light or someone might be crossing the street and you won't be able to see that person. You're putting others people life in danger. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f9b72d5c0b3,780F45FB6F2D,In this paragraph I'll tell you about the type of consequence you can get. It is illegal to use your phone while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1d1dcba4dbe,780F45FB6F2D,"You can receive a monetary fine which can range from $20 up to $500 depending on the state. Also can be charge as a criminal charge. In some states using your phone or texting while driving can be a result in criminal misdemeanor charges. Lastly, you can be in jail or prison time if your injury another driver or another human. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+455ec279f962,780F45FB6F2D,Example why you shouldn't use your phone. First thing first you can cause an accident. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77f5438937c7,780F45FB6F2D,You put your life in danger and other people's life in danger. You assume that you will have it under control but you never know what can happen any second. Also you might hit another car or pass a red light. These are reasons why not to use your phone. You can take an innocent person life and if you survive you will have pain inside you. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b192f1f7692e,780F45FB6F2D,"Finally, I believe you shouldn't use your phone is for the best. If you don't you don't have any risk on putting people life in danger. Everyone would be safe and no accidents would occur. Phones shouldn't even belong on your hand while driving. Unless you need it to get somewhere.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bf6479c7f9e9,7811131302BA,"The aouthor idea might sound or be a little bit carzy. The author however is not wrong, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+442bde4d32a4,7811131302BA,because Venus was once like the earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99a0c4f6b0b5,7811131302BA,still has features like the earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30404492ca2e,7811131302BA,and it is the nearst option for planetary visit. So let me explain and make the aouthor's idea a little bit less crazy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dcc209c1d34a,7811131302BA,Even thought Venus has a thicker atmosphere and is almost 97 percent corbond dioxide blackets according to paragraph 3. It was once earth like. it was proably coverd in large oceans. venus also might of supported various forms of life just like earth like is says in paragraph 4 ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e3a9addb6d7,7811131302BA,Maybe one day it will be like earth again. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f9afaa1f0e51,7811131302BA,"Venus might have the ""hottest surface temperture of any plant in our solar system"" (paragraph 3), erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes. But it still has features like earth. venus has rocky sediment. It also has mountains and craters like it states in paragraph 4 ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43f399333a87,7811131302BA,"The might be the reason why they call it earth's ""twin"" like it says in paragraph 2. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3e55b71e09b,7811131302BA,"""Venus is the closest planet to eartyh in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too"". This might be an advantage for NASA. It might be productive but ithas to be safe too. NASA discribe this trip like ""blimp-like""(paragraph 5). NASA is already studying and planing for the trip ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+baabdd83430b,7811131302BA,". It they trip might be short comparec to other planets but NASA want to make it as safe as possible. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f6249a4a11d,7811131302BA,"In conculsion, the authors idea might sound a bit bazzar, but it is not a bad idea. Since the planet a while ago was like earth, still looks like earth, and it is the closest to earth. So maybe in a couple of years NASA might finale make a plantery vist. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8c68c0c75ce0,78B951722074,"Summer break has always been an important time for students to relax, spend more time bonding with their families, and travel to new places. Although summer is typically a nice and warm few months for destressing, I know that my summer is always packed with sports, trips, and visits from family. But what if the kids return back to school having completely cut off their school learning for 3 months? Schools then add teacher organized projects to the agenda, meaning for families there is always a week or more at the end of summer where everyone is cramming to get all their project work done. This almost constantly leads to less time to enjoy the end of summer, parents having to be involved, and unfocused, rushed work being handed in on the first day of school. However, there is a solution: Students design and lead their own projects, based off their own interests and activities. Letting students lead their own projects still assures that they are spending time learning, but eliminates several of the negative factors. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c8cb4e79031a,78B951722074,Student-designed projects where kids can do a project that pertains to their certain hobbies and summer adventures are better than teacher-designed projects  ,Position,Effective,,,
+02a60516c9b7,78B951722074,kids would be more enthusiastic about the work ,Claim,Effective,,,
+835a96df91da,78B951722074,"parents would be less involved, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e6963d79252d,78B951722074,the learning they would be doing is more valuable overall. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+490828934353,78B951722074,"Last summer, I went to Italy and got to visit cities I had never imagined, learning so much about the history and culture. My summer assignments meant that once I got the the hotel, I wasn't napping ro relaxing, but up working on homework. It was uninteresting to me and tedious. If only I designed my own projects, then I could share with the teachers and school all the fascinating discovies I was making about Italy, and instead of sitting alone while my family was resting for our next excursion, record my beautiful day and turn it into a project that made sure my mind and writing and creative skills stayed fresh. I know that not every kid gets to go on a trip to Italy ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f98438bf006b,78B951722074,"Another reason that student-designed projects would be more beneficial is that typically, when kids are confused about their teacher-assigned project or need assistance, it is necessary for the parents to be involved. The age effects this as well, because some young elementary schoolers may be incapable of staying focused on the project without support. For most adults summer break still means going to work everyday unless they are out of town. Since there isn't teacher access at home, the parents get pulled into doing way more of the projec than they should, whether the kid is just disinterested or struggling ont heir own. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0dee352409dc,78B951722074,"Children are much more likely to be passionate about their own projects if they feel as if it is uniquely their own. The research and skills would go in to more depth with more focus, for example, if I got to write about what I had learned in Florence and Rome instead of doing mindless work. Anyone is much more likely to benefit and learn from something they love and enjoy. It is also more likely for the kid to retain the information better if they have some sort of association to it, like research about a place they went or sport they participated in. Teachers would have students returning back to school with project in their hands that they are excited to share with their peers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7228bc6b9332,78B951722074,"It is time for teacher-designed projects, which can be less interesting, stressful for families, and rushed, to be replaced by student-designed projects where students are independantly creative. Although it is good for schools to make sure all their children are not losing skills over the break, the same skills would be practiced if children got more freedom to design their own activity. Plus, summer work would be full of more enjoyment and acedemic value! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+665628151898,78F10D62A0DC,"In the story ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the autheor suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d38d6ce51898,78F10D62A0DC,"Venus is earth's twin,how it's one of the brightest points of light in the sky ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb736dd2b9e1,78F10D62A0DC,"how NASA has one ""particularly compelling"" idea for sending humans to study Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9901db600151,78F10D62A0DC,the different type of machines and devices NASA are coming up with to travel and explore Venus more and better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b186808280c,78F10D62A0DC,Now i'm going to state details on the the ways I said the author supports the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b17d1d7d7430,78F10D62A0DC,"It's earth's twin and how it was much like earth before,in paragraph 4 it says venus was probable covered largely with oceans and how it could of had various forms of life like earh is today. It also says how today Venus still has features analogous to Earth,how the surface is rocky sediment and has features such as valleys,mountains,and craters. And then the author said ""Venus can sometimes be the nearest option for planetary visit."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b46f524342c,78F10D62A0DC,"Then on how the author likes the ideas that NASA is coming up with to visit earth with what he/she said was a ""compelling idea"" and the machines and devices that their making that the author likes as well ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3a8ee5471949,78F10D62A0DC,"They would make vehicle to float above the fray hovering 30 miles above Venus landscape,it would avoid the badly ground conditions by keeping off it. ""Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" the authoer said. All of thes details are in paragraph 5. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a55b32b3598,78F10D62A0DC,Then in paraagrph 7 the author said NASA is coming up with a machine made of silicon carbide to work on Venus's surface. It has been tested. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95d7255ccec1,78F10D62A0DC,This is details to support on how the author sugguest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its dangers.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d10642e2fbd2,7915BE25917E,"If technology, that can read and tell your emotions is put into a classroom, then many students wouldnt be focused on schoolwork theyll be focused on a dumb app or piece of technology that can read your emotions. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+36d08db3537d,7915BE25917E,"With this advanced technology students will just keep changing if there smiling, if their mad, sad, glad, etc. and checking if the technology can actually do its job. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f58621143be,7915BE25917E,Teachers would probably be doing the same and would not be focused on teaching instead focused on a laptop or computer that can read emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83bf44aefbec,7915BE25917E,Emotions are shown everywhere whether your sad or happy anyone can tell by the way your acting or the way you look. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+487dc68558d2,7915BE25917E,We dont need technology to tell us how we feel or how were supposed to feel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f7825482f4d,7915BE25917E,"What if the technology tells you a wrong emotion, like what if your happy but it says your mad. Then that'll be the people that made it mad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+237b3ae41494,7915BE25917E,If we could actually have technology that does that like when a add pops up and you get mad then another one pops up and your happy then another one could pop up and it could be innapropiate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67571f898250,7915BE25917E,"This technology would probably even be far to expensive because its ""advanced"" and how cool schools afford it then. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+64b0a147ec63,7915BE25917E,Schools should not even try to afford this technology it will be really expensive. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a2fa96af798f,794A0704B01C,"School is very important to a students future. It allows different parts of the brain to flourish and grow whether it be in the main subjects like Math, Science, English and History, or even in the arts like music, dance, and theater. Even though students learn new things throughout the year, the new found information can sometimes be forgotten because of the lack of practice, which is why students completing summer projects is so important. The only problem with this is the decision on whether the projects should be student or teacher designed. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2a290252c379,794A0704B01C,"While some teacher-designed projects are good, summer projects should be designed by the student ",Position,Effective,,,
+271707b3bec3,794A0704B01C,"their summer plans will not get interrupted, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b3553212e03a,794A0704B01C,"the student can choose a topic that interests them, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+02a91500db41,794A0704B01C,it allows the student to learn responsibility. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a3e931ad9f4d,794A0704B01C,"When people become overwhelmed with school they begin to stop doing work and paying attention because they feel as though their is no point in doing work, if they are just going to fail anyways. Having a summer vacation and making plans to hang out with friends and family can relieve some of the stress put on students, because they can take that break to re-energize their interest in learning. Summer plans can also consist of traveling to other countries, which could be beneficial in a students topic. If a teacher were to design the projects, then the student would not only miss out on a spectacular opportunity to travel, because of having to stay home to do the project, but also because of a fun interesting topic they had to miss out on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+24b50f542346,794A0704B01C,"The danger in this scenario is that when a student becomes uninterested in what they are learning, it causes the student to not pay attention and stop doing work because of the lack of strive to learn. Not only does this situation cause a strain on the student who did not do his or her work, and the teacher, but also the other students in the class. The other students are also effected, because the teacher is now required to take the time out of the new lessons to re-teach what should have already been learned. To prevent this lack of gusto, summer projects should be chosen by the students so they can pick a topic that makes them want to learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+882e7e3de98d,794A0704B01C,"From being able to pick their topic, a student accepts the responsibility to create a project and execute it over the summer. This new found responsibility can encourage a student to create a planner to organize a schedule, make sure the project is relevant and challenging, and also that they can get the project done over their break, splitting their time doing fun activities and being able to recognize ones priorities. Students learning responsibilities like these at a young age can prepare them for their future careers. Since responsibility is such a big part in everyday life as an adult it is important that students learn how to be responsible now than in the future when it is too late. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e37e88ec0c53,794A0704B01C,"Since some schools require summer projects they should be student- designed because students should have a summer to relax and not have their plans ruined, students can choose a topic they are interested in and it allows students to learn responsibility. While there are so many more examples of why summer projects should be student led the examples stated are the most important ones. Students being able to make their own decisions is apart of life, and the school system not granting that experience is a tragedy because is stunts a students growth in learning. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+261f590b486b,79887DA7C1B1,"Summer is a time that both students and teachers tend to enjoy. It gives the students a chance to relax, and not worry about things such as homework, projects, quizzes, and tests. The teachers also get a chance to take a break from grading and assigning work. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6cf796eefae2,79887DA7C1B1,"Yet, if students still had to do a summer project in order to keep learning over the summer, it should be student-designed ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3cb3dce3869b,79887DA7C1B1,"students tend to be busier over the summer with many different things, and the project should cater to their schedule. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83996576361,79887DA7C1B1,"During the school year, most students are very busy with school work, along with different activities such as jobs, sports, and school clubs. For the most students, summer is the only opportunity that they have to relax, or spend time with family and friends. Vacations and family events are usually panned to take place during the summer. And a school project could interfere with that precious time ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a4a2698fe2b,79887DA7C1B1,The student should be the one to design the project in order for it to be flexible to their schedule. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90c1b1796c98,79887DA7C1B1,Students designing their on projects would also be a great opportunity for teachers to get a break. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+caa55f9610df,79887DA7C1B1,"Many teachers tend to spend hours on end coming up with lesson plans and grading work. Although teachers would still have to grade the project, the student would be taking a small work load off of the teacher by designing the summer project themselves, And, it could possibly educate the teacher on a different subject. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e1199505966,79887DA7C1B1,"Giving students the benefit of designing the summer project could also let them be more creative =, and enjoy the task at hand ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5bd2d8a3af77,79887DA7C1B1,"Most of the time when students have to do projects, it is based off of a subject that is being taught in school: Such as math, history, and science. Letting students be more creative could also allow them to integrate their summer project into their summer schedule. Such as calculating the total amount of hours they have worked, doing historic research on the family vacation spot, or counting how many steps was taken during a hike. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a92d7af1385a,79887DA7C1B1,Some may argue that students would not be responsible enough to plan and execute the summer project. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+035481e55af7,79887DA7C1B1,"Though, there are students who do not do the appropriate amount of work throughout the school year, many students already handle great responsibilities in their life; such as babysitting a younger sibling, sports practices, and having a job to not only support themselves, but their families too. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3b7385e73356,79887DA7C1B1,"As previously stated, summer is usually an important time for both students and teachers. Rather they use it to participate in activities, or family events. Or, relax and take a break from school and work. At the end of the day, a student's education is important to maintain. But, so is their time and schedules. That is why students should be the ones to design their own summer project. Along with the fact that it would lighten up a teachers work load so they as well could enjoy their time off. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0f87fdf84cb6,79E32F48A399,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dnager ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f46a802d9224,79E32F48A399,"becuase the atmosphere is almost 07persent carbon dioxide. Venu is a very hot place.""On the planet;s surface, temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we ecperience.""On Venu's the condition are far more ectreme than anything us humans have encounter on earth . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+120eee8ae3f6,79E32F48A399,"As the student reads in the passage its say that ""Venus has the hottest surface temperatur of any planet in our solar system "". Many of the people reading this think that it is hot on earth but what we dont relize is that Venus is ver hot. Many of the people in the world think that Mercury would be the hottest because it is closer to the sun . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+282bcc81b976,79E32F48A399,Why the scientist are even discussing furth visits is because astronmers say that they are fascinated by Venus because it is well known for its Earth-like planet .       ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+097a7a22df9c,7A0C11980EB8,"According to the author of the ""Challenges of Exploring Venus,"" he believes that it is a good idea to pursue more knowledge of the planet Venus. The author feels that getting to know our sister planet is important, and that there are ways to explore this planet safely and effectivly ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3051af45107b,7A0C11980EB8,"The author gives great examples of ways too explore the planet safely and effectivly, also he gives reasons why it would be beneficial. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+15ae0c05f9e2,7A0C11980EB8,Pursuing and expanding our knowledge of venus is beneficial in many ways and can be safely done. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5f4c03b9d28,7A0C11980EB8,"Venus having an average of 800 degrees fahrenheit on its surface, make's it virtually inhabitable to humans. These conditons are so extreme the author explains that ""such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed too diving to the deepest parts of our oceans."" Venus has very harsh conditions and it make's it virtually impossible to explore it from the surface and proposes a tough challenge on finding alternatives ways to explore it. Although, NASA has proposed an idea to explore the harsh planet. NASA believes we can explore the planet from a distance approximately 30 miles away. The author explains that the pressure would be comparable to sea level on earth, tempature would be around 170 degrees. The author states that ""Not easy conditions but survivable for humans."" The mission would propose great danger and it would be a expontential battle, but with the right people and technology it could be done and accomplished. The benefit is the knowledge gained from this great planet that has had the world beat for a long time, it is time to step up to the challenge and explore Venus for the people of this world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+714b00a382a3,7A0C11980EB8,"In conclusion, the author supports the exploration of Venus, and is open to finding ways to explore this harsh planet. He believes that the knowledge we would gain from Venus would be very beneficial to the people. He believes that mankind has endured many other harsh endeavors such as the exploration of Venus, and the curosity of mankind will likely lead us to exploring the great hot planet of Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d81b4c966419,7A0F4648B341,"Extracurricular activities are fun. We can play sports after school, join different clubs, or play some games with other students. But we always get to choose what we want to do, right? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+eccc19d35401,7A0F4648B341,Mandatory participation in extracurricular activities is not good for students ,Position,Effective,,,
+06905df6ad96,7A0F4648B341,"they may not have time to stay after (jobs, other classes, homework, sports) ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ef4f38b2defe,7A0F4648B341,"they might not be interested in any of the activities offered at school, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+25a9f29d3ded,7A0F4648B341,they lose the freedom to choose for themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+03b4053a17d0,7A0F4648B341,"They get homework from multiple classes, participate in sports or music classes, and they hangout with their friends and have fun being a teenager. Making students be forced to stay after school would not work for students who play sports and have practice, or students who have to help support their families with a job. Having them be forced to do an activity would take away time from other things that they need to do, or things that they want to do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69f14b892f44,7A0F4648B341,"Some people like to play basketball, some like to play hockey, some like to play football. Likewise, students all have different sets of skills and things that they enjoy. Some students may want to do something that is not offered at that school, yet they wouldn't be able to. It doesn't make sense that they should participate in something that they don't enjoy. If a person who does not like to play sports is forced to play an after school sport, that would unfair towards them. Or, if a person who only likes to draw has to take an extracurricular activity, what would they do if there isn't an art club? Making the students do something they would not like or they're not interested in is not very fair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a552955bd291,7A0F4648B341,"Making participation mandatory for extracurricular activities is impeding on the students right to choose for themselves. They learn in their classes that everyone has their rights, and taking them away is very unconstitutional, so it's ironic that their ability to have a choice is taken away from them. They don't have the freedom to choose if they want to participate anymore, which is unfair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+44817f307025,7A0F4648B341,"If we look on the other side of this argument, the point is that students should take extracurricular activities to better themselves. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d1228e4c6301,7A0F4648B341,"This actually makes sense, except that they should be required to do it. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+83adff3c950c,7A0F4648B341,"Mandatory participation in extracurricular activities is bad for students because the students may not have time, they might not be interested and they lose the ability to choose for themselves. It is important students that students have the right to choose so they know that there are always options. If students are forced to take extracurricular activites, they will become more disheartened, more weary and tired from balancing their social and academic lives along with sports and other classes, and wake up with less promise that they would have a good day. After all, we do need to nurture our students, as they are the future of the world, as the next generation. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+26f11a828b41,7A347C69D3D1,"Summer projects are a helpful tool to use to gain insight of a student's capabilities and to prepare them for the upcoming school year. Summer projects can be used for any subject or curriculum to help a student for their next courses, whether they are college level or not ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f23f70f5b4f3,7A347C69D3D1,"Even though summer projects are designed to help students and can be done in a number of ways, it is beneficial to have it designed based on the teacher's curriculum and needs. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0192af7fc5e1,7A347C69D3D1,"Though there are different varieties of how to formulate a summer assignment, having it expand on student skills and help teach a new subject can be beneficial for the teacher. Summer assignments can be used as a review and to help teach a new subject based on what the course is ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a6cc3fea027,7A347C69D3D1,Having it designed around the teacher's curriculum and upcoming plans allows for students to get a grasp and to expect what will be taught and the level of difficulty the class will be. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+90d025cfde73,7A347C69D3D1,"summer assignments for math tend to review previous subjects that will be used for a harder math course and will help expand on this knowledge. A summer assignment that I have done is one for Precalculus with Trigonometry that not only reviewed previous math skills but expanded on them which helped to prepare me for the course. Students have voiced that these projects are too hard and can never finish them in time. That is why assignments are given at the beginning of summer to allow exponential time to do them and are made in a way to teach and prepare students for what they will learn in a harder course, making an easier assignment will not be beneficial for these reasons. Summer projects can be made with different variations, having them based on a teacher's plans allows for an preparedness and an expansion of skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ee381eb47e2,7A347C69D3D1,"Summer projects are a beneficial tool for all students and teachers, though it is helpful for a teacher in the new year to teach the subject if students have some knowledge about it. Students tend to struggle when going into a new year, especially with classes that are college leveled and they have no knowledge about it or what they may be getting into. For an AP class, it can be useful for a student to complete an assignment and have some indication of what the teacher's curriculum is and be able to prepare for the class or even drop if they feel like they may fail it. I am in college weighted class now, and if it wasn't for the summer project, I can say I could have possible failed the class if it wasn't based on the teacher's curriculum and I could've been entirely loss in the class. Students may say that a summer assignment should be fun and they should be able to pick what to do, but a student picking the assignment will not be beneficial for the teacher, it can cause a teacher to redo their year plans and may be behind on teaching and preparing a student for an upcoming exam. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dd35524e72be,7A347C69D3D1,"Though students can pick if what and if they want to do the summer project, the assignments being based on the teacher's future teaching plans will allow the student to know upcoming expectations. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e102f65fe7b9,7A347C69D3D1,"Summer projects are a tool to help a teacher, having them designed around the teacher's plans will allow each teacher to know where each student is and know where to focus most in the curriculum. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8122d2a168e4,7A347C69D3D1,"Every student had different previous teachers who teach in different ways and have different capabilities and extensions of learning which can cause a struggle for teachers. For example, my English summer project was to read and annotate a novel so I could write an argumentative essay on it. After turning it in, it became clear to my AP Language Arts teacher that not every student was on the same skill level for writing and that she would have to reteach the basis of writing for different formats of essays; without the summer project she would not have know this. Summer reading assignments should allow a student to choose the book so they will want to read and get the assignment done. Having this choice, students may pick a book that is not on their skill level and can hurt them when doing assignments in the class. It will ruin teacher plans on what each unit will be and what will be taught in said units ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+517c0e9b7ac0,7A347C69D3D1,"Though students are mature enough to choose their assignments and parts for the projects, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ed743f1ee6b6,7A347C69D3D1,teachers design them to know more about each student and will be prepared to reevaluate their lesson plans. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e610a603f059,7A347C69D3D1,"Summer assignments come in a variety of ways, but having them based on the teacher's units and plans for the school year will prepare both student and teacher. Summer projects can be used in any subject to benefit the teacher and allow a smooth year for easier teaching when knowing the students skill set and be prepared to change plans to accommodate these. As a student continues to move up the grades and start taking college leveled classes, it is imperative to have some incoming knowledge of the subject and to expand on previous skills. Summer projects can either be student designed or teacher designed, but in the end a student ill benefit only if the assignment is based on the teacher. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+648b93468926,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"Imagine your principal creating an extra curricular activity assignment that you have to choose whether to be in a sport, yearbook comitee, or student council. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+102e268a2bf2,7A3E4D5F7F6D,I for one would be in love with this idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+295c4333d8f3,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"Extra curricular activities are fun, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+536cc779d0dd,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"stress coping, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+125dbb130588,7A3E4D5F7F6D,can improve life skills. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f711b8e16b7a,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"Sports to me are just my life, they take time away from school and relieve so much stress. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f781238fabf6,7A3E4D5F7F6D,Extra curricular activity relieve a lot of stress from school and give an extra hobby to participate in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eae40c070b2d,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"Taking stress away from school is a very important to a students mind.
+
+With to much stress students don't preform as well as they should because their mind is clouded by all the work they have to get done that they have for later.
+
+Students with lots of stress their grades tend to drop because they cannot function, but with extra curricular activities they can get help and complete their missing work with the help of others. An extra curricular activity I would recommend to students with this problem is to stay after school and get help from a teacher.
+
+Therefore after this session with your teacher you have completed your work and now some stress is gone.
+
+With extra curricular activities students have the option of help and they can succeed by using this method. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83b64b913986,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"Sports is a great extra curricular activity that is fun. With sports you can play with your friends and have fun. I play on a sports team and it is really fun because a lot of my friends are on the team causing sports to be more enjoyable to me, but what if you don't like sports. There are many extracurricular activities that are also fun. What I recommend is that you find something your good at and join or make a extra curricular activity about it. Extra curricular activities can be really fun or boring but if you get something out of it, than it has some type of meaning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9664fd0ed79c,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"Some extra curricular activities that you can make or find that can help with life skills is Baking,Sewing, and speaking a different language there are places near you that can help you with life skills.
+
+An example of this is my mom participates in a cooking class down the street from my house and my dad participates in a foreign language class so when he travels for work he'll know how to speak in a foreign language and understand what people are saying there.
+
+Extra curricular activities are there to help you with life skills too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bbf6d0b5aec0,7A3E4D5F7F6D,"I completely agree with the principals assignment and I would recommend to a lot of people that participating in an extra curricular activity would be a good thing. Extra curricular activities are fun, stress coping, and can improve life skills. Extra curricular activities can make it easier to suite your personal needs and help you get work done.
+
+Extra curricular activities can also be fun and interactive with other people. But the main thing to remember is that extracurricular activities are supposed to help with your needs.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1db20d7c0ba7,7A86EA9E70AC,"TO THE FELLOW CITIZENS OUT THERE WE ARE LIMITING CAR'S BECAUES PEOPLE DONT LIKE TO PAY THERE CAR, BECAUES THEY EIGTHER DONT HAVE THE MONEY FOR IT OR THEY JUST DONT WANNA PAY IT.. PEOPLE ALL AROUND THE COUNTRY DONT LIEK AYING THER CADR THATS WHY PEOPLES CAR GET TODE BECAUSE PEOPLE ARE LAZY..WHEN A CHILD HAS A SOCCER GAME TO GO TO WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF YOU DONT HAVE A CAR TO GET THERE ?OYU PROBABLY DO EVERYTHING YOU CANTO GET THERE TO SUPPORT YOUR CHILD... ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+da0b03d73de3,7A86EA9E70AC,"IN GERMAN LIFE GOES WITHOUT CARS.. IN EVERY STATE PEOPLES CAR GET TODE FOR NOT DOING WHAT THEY NEED TO DO FOR THEE CAR..AS A RESULT, 60 PERCENT OF PEOPLE DONT OWN A CAR AND 42 PERCENT OF PEOPLE SOLD THERE CAR TO MOVE IN A DIFFERENT HOME..WHEN SOME PEOPLE HAVE CARS THEY LOVE TO GO DO WHAT THEY LIKE O DO TO HAVE FUN.WHEN KIDS HAVE BICYCLES MAKE SURE YOUR OUTSIDE WITH THEM BE YOU WOULDNT WANT THEM TO GET HIT BY A CAR OR YOU DONT WANT THEM TO GET HURT.. IN THE UNITED STATES THE ENVIRMOENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY IS PROMOTING ""CAR REDUCED "" COMMUNITIES ,AND LEGISLATORS ARE STARTING TO ACT, IF CAUTIOSLY..
+
+PARIS BANS DRIVING DUE TO SMOG..ALOT OF PEOPLES GET FINES FOR NOT PAYING THERE TICKETS OR THEY DO STUFF THAT THEY SHOULDNT BE DOING..LIKE 4,000 DRIVERS WERE FINESAND TWENTY SEVEN PEOPLE HAD THEIR CARS IMPOUNDED FOR THEIR REACTION TO THE FINES.. DIESELS MAKE UP 67 PERCENT FRANCE , COMPARED 53.3 PERCENT OF DIESEL ENGINES IN THE REST OR WESTERN EUROPE , ACCORDING TO REUTERS..PEOPLE WHO DONT HAVE LICENSE NEEDA STOP DRIVING OR THEY WILL GET PULLED OVER AND THEY WILL GET A TICKET AND WILL HAVE TO PAY ALO OF MONEY TO GET IT BACK..
+
+CAR-FREE DAY IS SPINNING INTO A BIG HIT IN BOGOTA.. IN EVERY YEAR CARS HAVE BEEN BANNED WITH ONLY BUSES AND TAXIS PERMITTED FOR THE DAY WITHOUT CARS IN THIS CAPITAL CITY OF 7 MILLION..SMOG VIOLATORS FACES 25$ FINES.WHENEVER PEOPL DONT HAVE CARS THEY COMPAIN ABOUT HOW THEY HATE TO AWALK AND RIDE BIKES , WHY COPLAIN IF U HAVE A CAR U WOULD DO DUMB THINGS TO GET IN TROUBLE.. PEOPLE DONT NEED TO COMPLAIN ABOUT NOTHING BECUAES PEOPLE LIKE TO DO THINGS THEY SHOULDNT DO . DONT DO STUPID THINGS AND MAYBE YOU WOULD HAVE A CAR .. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3387fef7b98,7A86EA9E70AC,IN CONCLUTION PEOPLE DONT NEED CARS ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c21d5e6c4ff0,7A86EA9E70AC,THEY COULD WALK RIDE A BIKES OR DO SOMETHING .. PEOPLE WHO DONE HAVE LICENSE NEED TO NOT DRIVE BECAUSE THEY CAN GET INTO BIG TROUBLE AND THEY WOULD GO TO JAIL FOR IT ..    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+16cc138d5c99,7ADE90498A72,"In the story Luke's friend played a big role in him becoming a seagoing cowboy, because he invitied him to go to Europe with him. If his friend didn't invite him Luke would not be know. Thats the reason his friend played a big role
+
+On luke's adventurs he travled to alot of places that were left in ruins from World War II.he wold bring cattle from farms hence the name seagoing cowboys. He went to New Orleans,Greece,Europe,China,Venice,and Italy and helped them recover from the war.
+
+When him and the crew would have to go somewhere to pass the time they would play baseball,volleyball,ping pong,fencing,boxing,reading,and whittling. On luke's second trip he was a night watchman, he would check on the animals every hour. On one rainy night after he made his hourly report to the captian he was going down a ladder and sliped then fell on his back causing him not able to work for a couple of days because he craked his ribs. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40d1a8d9693e,7AFEC882B9F5,"Summer break is a time for relaxation but, sometimes schools may assign students projects over the break. Thoughts of whether projects should be student or teacher designed have been tossed around. Some students of course would choose to do projects of their own choosing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+557c24b0a8d9,7AFEC882B9F5,In my opinion projects should be teacher designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b3d93d666221,7AFEC882B9F5,"there will be a higher chance of completion due to, a time frame, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7a8272d5bfc9,7AFEC882B9F5,taking away pressure ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7c700ed3d74e,7AFEC882B9F5,a quenching of students thirst for knowledge. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e110cc45bd67,7AFEC882B9F5,When it comes to any type of work there is a time frame in which it needs to be completed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f24d6ecdec2a,7AFEC882B9F5,"When teachers assign students projects they are thought out and planned, if students are given the opportunity to design projects themselves especially over break there is the factor of procrastination. Teachers will assign students a project that is set in stone which will take away thoughts of changing the project over and over again which would lead to time loss. Teacher designed projects may not impact students summer break at all because, the student will know exactly what he or she has to do in order to complete project . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b0ccefb6590c,7AFEC882B9F5,Teacher designed projects also take pressure off the students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e7bf0fdcf98f,7AFEC882B9F5,Students may not know what kind of project will be worthy enough for a good grade and may second guess themselves. Some teachers have higher expectations for their students than others can which make some students feel pressured. Teacher designed projects will lower that feeling due to the fact students will not have to bend over backwards to create a project that will be enough to please his or her teacher. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7aee0da0860d,7AFEC882B9F5,People old and young have a thirst for knowledge students especially. Teachers may give students a project they know nothing about but the goal is for the student to keep learning while on break ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c5a321bda156,7AFEC882B9F5,"When given a teacher designed project if the students have all the knowledge about the project, or not they will learn or discover new things. Projects require research which gives students the opportunity to discover tons of new information. Widening the students education and preparing them for next year. Student may pick an easy project that requires only prior knowledge which will keep them at same level of education they had before summer break. Which is why teacher designed projects will give students an opportunity to better themselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4095db5c5062,7AFEC882B9F5,Some may argue that student designed projects will benifit the student more than a teacher designed project because of the chance of an easy grade. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d3e3985b9067,7AFEC882B9F5,When a teacher designed project will give students the opprotunity to widen their knowledge ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bea7e2706327,7AFEC882B9F5,"Teacher desigend projects make this possible by, giving a time frame, taking away pressure, and giving more knowledge to the student.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+17d4741f252e,7AFF516471C0,to my opinion i think that we should not be practiceing to find out a eay if we could use a computure to read our emotional expressions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d86d7f666fa,7AFF516471C0,to my point of view as a student i woldnt like if s computure would look at me nd say oh shes feeling happy. because computers does not have a soul do when i hear that they should have computures to se if they can read emotions well i think thats is redundunt. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24999b9ee6c4,7AFF516471C0,"now as they said in the story paragraph 3 sentence one, they can begin the process when the computure constructs a 3-D computure model f the face; all 44 major musclesin the modela must move like a human muscles. now in other words make a robot that looks exactly like a human and can do human things. i think that why are we trying to make robots to be like human do we serously want another thing on this planet that might ruin it even more. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df2457f92c85,7AFF516471C0,now some people believe that we should have robots to help us etc ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+af8063e80150,7AFF516471C0,but they also say what if they become evil and they go against us and take over the world and kill us all. i think that if they ever make robots and that were to happen then it was all planned because this bings me back to my point. robots dont have souls which means that they cant procces haterate in them. unless they were programed to feel hate but they are sensative so if they actually learn how scientist wants them to learn then i believe that they still wouldnt take over the world unless they were programed to. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+5959bd613bc1,7AFF516471C0,i think that if a student actually thinks that it would be nice to have the computure read your emotions and you could talk to it and stuff ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a82b50839363,7AFF516471C0,then i feel lik that would seperte our world even moe ut this time is seperate from eachother from our closest friends and family because they would become our friends and they will become our family. i think if you want to end bulling and family problems etc. then is still not a good idea. like i said this still leads to segragation within ourseleves ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f21dcc8dbf02,7AFF516471C0,so if ou ask me do you think that we should make robots to read our emotions. i would just simply say no its to complicated and learn to comunicate with people to fix problems and dont try to be the ruler of evrything cause you will fail and if the world ends ill blame it on you. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aa51da598077,7B0D23FCA29B,"Nine times out of ten children will get bad habits from not adding an extracurricular activity to their schedule.
+
+Causing them to be lazy and end up with bad grades. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ef464ffce0bf,7B0D23FCA29B,"when you add at least one or more extracurricular activity to your schedule, it can help you ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f144e8864468,7B0D23FCA29B,"be more social, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d43b53dfb71a,7B0D23FCA29B,"get ready for high school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+808454647436,7B0D23FCA29B,"have a healthier schedule. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+570cdcec33a1,7B0D23FCA29B,"When getting a new activity to do at the end of the day, you will end up with other people. Meeting different people is one of the ways to clear bad social habits. Because of the fact that they are in the same activity as you, some of them might have the same interests. This can cause you to have new friends, this will help you work with others. Working with others is a good factor when you have an extracurricular, and it's not as hard as opinions might think. Working with others has a bad side to it because of this you could get annoyed, but you can get use to it by building tolerance ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+463d1fe6f64b,7B0D23FCA29B,To get ready for high school you are going to need a good GPA score meaning you need a high grade if not higher. Getting an extra activity can help you if not guide you to the higher GPA. Sometimes the teachers will give you extra credit activities or let you finish work that you want to get done. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+280f112fab4b,7B0D23FCA29B,Building a healthy schedule is very important because it can effect what you do now and what you will do in the future. When you add something to your schedule it will help you be able to take hard and stressful tasks. This will help you when ever you dont have a lot of people around to help. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea519fcee560,7B0D23FCA29B,"Now some people might say that it's ""too hard"",""I just dont need it"" , or "" it takes too much time"". ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c5974dbe2a77,7B0D23FCA29B,But student will need this when they have nothing else to do or when they have bad grades and they need help. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d5dd7dbfcd27,7B0D23FCA29B,"If adding an extra curricular activity to a students time, then it will give them social skills, lead them to high school, and help build a healthy schedule. These are the main things that students need to be successful. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9dafb14d9601,7B52C05A4BDB,"Does your school do summer assignments? Some teachers give summer assignments that require too much or take the whole summer to finish. This statement leaves you thinking, should students make the summer assignments or teachers? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a3af92020dd8,7B52C05A4BDB,I believe it should be student-based assignments ,Position,Adequate,,,
+166b48665bc5,7B52C05A4BDB,these assignments would allow students to be creative in their own ways. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71ccc33f55ad,7B52C05A4BDB,if students make these assignments they can relate in so many different ways ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ead9ccc0444b,7B52C05A4BDB,Making these assignments student-based makes the students think of creative things to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0226dfad4b6c,7B52C05A4BDB,"Critical thinking would be the number one outcome of these projects. Students shouldn't be allowed to make the assignments to easy because although they are student-based assignments, you will still have to think about how the teachers feel and what they think about it. Allowing these students to be creative with these assignments is a very good thing. They will be encouraged to think out-of-the-box. They will create fun things that teachers probably couldn't think of. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b581450e5e7,7B52C05A4BDB,"When creating these projects, students will be encouraged to work together. This will allow students to relate to each other, creating different ideas. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8970d422f562,7B52C05A4BDB,"Although, relating to each other when creating these projects is a great thing, some students will think otherwise. Some students will say that they enjoy the summer assignments that teachers give and don't want students to take that away. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9a69ca65063b,7B52C05A4BDB,"I personally don't like the summer assignments teachers give us because they require the whole summer to do. Kids like me want to have fun, not stay at home and read a book all day. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+bdc5ba80a69b,7B52C05A4BDB,"I strongly believe students should make these summer assignments, allowing us to critically thing and be creative. Teachers want to make you critically think but their assignments are boring and always the same. We need students to put a fun and interesting spin on summer assignments. Leaving us with a brain full of knowledge and power. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7e942350a866,7BB7EF3AD4C6,Unmasking the Face on Mars is talking about how some people discused how it was created by aliens and other scientist just say it is a natural landform and i agree. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c9854b8ac914,7BB7EF3AD4C6,May 24 2001 tenty five years ago NASAs space craft found a shadowy likeness of a human face . Scientist believe that it is a natural based lanform called a Martian messa common enough around Cydonia ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39d75fc60ef4,7BB7EF3AD4C6,"A few days later NASA unveiled it for all to see. Now few scientist think their is an alien artifact, but they are wrong. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+12360abb0b48,7BB7EF3AD4C6,"As soon as word got out on April 5th 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time.
+
+They snaped a picture ten times sharper than the originak viking photo . Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting for the JPL website to show the picture scientist revealed the picture as a natural landform there was no alien monument after all , stated in paragraph 7 . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b9281ea6ba5,7BB7EF3AD4C6,There was no evidence of there ever being an alien just a historical landform that was a familiar to a humans face . But people were still not satisfied about the research . What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or messa lanform not an alien or artifact . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5cc3ba3467e2,7BDF02EBF9F9,"Venus is the second planet from the sun and the closest planet to Earth, in terms of density and size. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7effde149f99,7BDF02EBF9F9,Studying Venus would be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8ba7e1e5346a,7BDF02EBF9F9,"if anything would happen to Earth it would be the nearest option for a planetary visit, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0ae21fe7d8b6,7BDF02EBF9F9,"we would learn more about Venus and the planet's harsh conditions, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+152a06aa4d8f,7BDF02EBF9F9,"Venus is like Earth in multiple ways like being able to support life. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+1f6e9b6bafd0,7BDF02EBF9F9,"If anything would ever happen to Earth, Venus would be our closet option for a planetary visit ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ea234db8830a,7BDF02EBF9F9,"In paragraph two the text states,""Earth, Venus,and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus."" This piece of text from the passage shows that if anything were to happen to Earth, Venus would be our closet option for a planetary visit because Venus is one of our planetary neighbors and closet to Earth at times. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fdb43a26d39,7BDF02EBF9F9,"Secondly, we should continue studying Venus because it will allow us to learn more about Venus and the planet's harsh conditions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+02f7f3fbd832,7BDF02EBF9F9,"In paragraph three the text illustrates,""On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" This piece of text from paragraph three shows that we should continue studying Venus because it will allow us to learn more about the plant's harsh conditions and we would be able to see what materials could or couldn't work in such extreme heat. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+50db7152e1d1,7BDF02EBF9F9,"Finally, Venus is the planet that is most like Earth and use to have to ability to support life. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0edce5725cf4,7BDF02EBF9F9,"In paragraph four the passage states,""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" This piece of text from paragraph four shows that Venus is the planet most like Earth and had the ability to support life because it use to be covered in oceans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89e7b46c66f3,7BDF02EBF9F9,"In summary, we should continue studying the planet Venus despite the dangers because if anything were to happen to our planet, Earth, Venus would be the closest planet we could go to, we could learn more about Venus and the planet's harsh conditions, and because Venus is most like Earth and had the ability to support life. Furthering our research on Venus can only benefit us, so lets stop worrying about the dangers and get out and explore our planetary neighbor. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+832050cf77cd,7BE3B580C5DB,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" did a fair job at arguing their claim, that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0f82b473d363,7BE3B580C5DB,The author used their thesis ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0b0f1ba3d8e,7BE3B580C5DB,counter-arguements ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ba01d352531,7BE3B580C5DB,and rebutals to get across their point that Venus is a worthwhile investment to study. Some areas they exceeded and others they did not hit right on the ball. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c00070866a0a,7BE3B580C5DB,"The author throughout the essay did not convey a very well stated thesis. Typically, a writer of an arguementative essay would feature their thesis openly, so that the reader is able to see what side the author is pushing forward. However, this author did not do this. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d9484581f16,7BE3B580C5DB,"The first paragraph introduces the topic of Venus with an interesting hook, but does not give the reader their side. The reader needs a thesis, without one the reader is not going to be able to have their opinion on a topic swayed. The author's current attempt at a thesis statement , ""While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved very challenging place to examine more closely,"" does not state what side they are on clearly. Their best declaration of the side they are on is in their very last paragraph. The author wrote, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" This is a very strongly worded thesis, but would have been much better if placed in the starting paragraph. Their side on the topic was acknowledged, but not as well as it could have been if they had set up their thesis correctly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+01edcdfad9c0,7BE3B580C5DB,"Beyond the thesis, the author used many counter-arguements in their writing. This is one of their strong suits, acknowledging both sides of an arguement is one of the best ways to convey your opinion affectively, while still being able to keep opposing side of the arguement interested and have their minds open to change ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b7651a7353f8,7BE3B580C5DB,"The author is for the exploration of Venus, but consistently chooses to bring up the problems that doing so faces. The author writes about the difficulties about exploring Venus, because of the planet's extreme environment. They opposed their own side in paragraph three by saying, ""These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals."" This is an affective strategy, because people who may oppose exploration to Venus may say something similar to this. The author is arguing their own point to establish reliability and trust amongst with people who favor not exploring Venus. The author showing that they see the problems with exploring Venus shows that they are open minded and open to their mind being changed, and this will in turn have the reader do the same. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+590a099b51c0,7BE3B580C5DB,"Furthermore, the author was able to affectively state rebutals and reinforce their own opinion with facts ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+523e294222dd,7BE3B580C5DB,"From the example stated earlier, regaurding the extreme conditions in Venus, the author was able to provide a logical solution to the weather without using any opinions. The author wrote,""NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow sceintists to float above the fray."" The author then goes onto describe NASA's plan in full depth, and going into fine detail about the floating contraption that would suspend the astronauts safely above the harsh atmosphere of Venus. They then state, ""Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" The author is displaying a solution for the conditions, and even the minor flaws it has. The author going into detail about the solution for the extreme conditions in Venus and even conceding a bit when saying, ""Not easy conditions but survivable for humans,"" helps argue their point. They affectively refuted the counter-arguements by using factual evidence in their rebutal, and deemed themselves trustworthy by the opposing side by even conceding slightly on a few issues. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+35678e424984,7BE3B580C5DB,"The author of ""The Callenge of Exploring Venus"" did a fair job when arguing that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. While the author did accurately present the dangers and solutions for the dangerous parts of exploring Venus, they failed to create a strong thesis. The author exceeded when giving factual information about the topic to help the reading get on their side of the arguement; do to them struggling to get across their position on if Venus exploration is worthwhile, some of the provided information they gave was not used to it's full potential when changing the reader's opinion. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d8b62891e83,7C4E2E967B41,"People shouldn't be using cell phones while driving, because driving is really important and there are multiple things that can happen while driving that are bad. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+3468f26f84f7,7C4E2E967B41,"In the .U.S. every year is 6 million. More than 90 people die in car accidents everyday. All they will have to do is just stay off the phone and save their life's. I know everyone loves their phone because I love mines too. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51bbb8543309,7C4E2E967B41,I understand sometimes it could be an emergency ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8fe061e9a630,7C4E2E967B41,"but still at the same time, that's why you just turn your emergency lights on. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4f4190ca2740,7C4E2E967B41,"When you learn how to drive, the people tell you that at all times keep your eyes on the road at all times. If you don't pay attention to the road you can cause yourself and someone else to die.
+
+It's an increased risk of crashing. While driving your usage might be banned so you won't be able to use your phone while driving.
+
+Please drivers keep your eyes on the road and off the phones. Like for example you can last 30 minutes without being on the phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b31aef0a402,7C4E2E967B41,"Cell phone use while driving has become a leading cause of vehicle crashes over the last two decades. Drivers are distracted, decreasing the driver's awareness on the road, leading to more car crashes. It's extremely dangerous in horrified accidents. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffe81817a14d,7C4E2E967B41,"Everyone wants to be free and safe and not have to go through court and the hospital. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c5d847eae3e,7C4E2E967B41,"Teens are only supposed to be on the devices a certain amount of time and this goes for teens and adult that drive. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac064f078a07,7C4E2E967B41,"Also you can get in a car accident by having a lot of people in the car and loud music those are called distractions and then on top of that, that's like the quicks way to get a ticket. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bb6b2158a04c,7C4E2E967B41,"There are so many ways to lose your life in just a little amount of time. You can be in the car and your and you can be horse playing and you looking back them a car can run into your car then all of you and your friends are dead. This is like something everyone who got their licenses should know, because they had to pass the test to get their licenses. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eca3c5909bb3,7C4E2E967B41,"To conclude, Just to know, everyone be safe because nobody needs to try to end their life too soon and easily. Keep your phones off and pay attention to the road at all times . Ignore all distractions most difficulty and everything will be okay and great. Driving is very serious at any times. People who can't really see don't need to be driving at night that's not safe either .               ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bede2deac529,7C8B867A0A1A,"Cars, they help us get from point A to B in a shorter amount of time, but at what cost. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+89219583de77,7C8B867A0A1A,Cars are a large source of stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+338538fc24f2,7C8B867A0A1A,"produce large ammounts of pollution, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5782c12f1de,7C8B867A0A1A,"and seem, even now, to be going out of style. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f2c57917375,7C8B867A0A1A,"Cars are a luxury, not a necessity, and now they might not even be as usefull. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b837c312d57e,7C8B867A0A1A,More and more people are putting down the car keys and choosing instead to take a bike or bus. Cars are just too stressful to be a necesity. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c24dc76ffcb3,7C8B867A0A1A,"In Vauban, Germany, many people are giving up engines. According to the
+
+New York Times,
+
+""70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars,"" showing that life can go on efficiently even without a car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40e5301d3d7d,7C8B867A0A1A,"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent is some car-intensive areas in the united states, acording to the
+
+New York Times . Paris actually enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city after days of near-record pollution. The ban was enforced with a $31 fine. Even with 4,000 drivers fined, congestion was down 60 percent and the smog cleared enough that the ban could be lifted the next day. Using more enviornmentally inclined sources of transportation will deffinetly help leave a cleaner planet for future generations, and the generations already here. Cars are conveinient for short term gratification, but the long term effects might devastate the enviornment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f51ce1f4690,7C8B867A0A1A,"A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009 in the united states. Bogota, Colombia even becan a ""car-free day"" in wich all cars, besides busses and taxis, are banned in this capital city of 7 million for an entire day. Violaters of this ban are fined $25. ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,"" said businessman Carlos Plaza. This event is even starting to spread. For the first time two other Colombian cities have joined the event. Using cars is becoming less and less common, and it's a trend the enviornment can enjoy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c54e56b8b57,7C8B867A0A1A,"In conclusion, cars are a hiderance. Cars are stressful and cumbersome objects, getting rid of them would help reduce stress in the population. Cars are high contributers to pollution, creating smog and causing problems. Also, cars are a comodity that is being used less and less. People are putting down the car keys and picking up a bike. So why not join the trend? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6222b61d06aa,7C9AA3346458,I belive my claim for or against the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions are invading our private space ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92fab68e5437,7C9AA3346458,What i'm trying to say is what if they computer says the wrong things or if we feel something that could be embarrasing or offended it'll cause us to either become more emotional or angry/offended. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f316b20a018,7C9AA3346458,I believe you will also be taking jobs of those who have went to college to major in this type of senarios ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42fc8bfb78e4,7C9AA3346458,If you are taking all of this for people to have it on a computer software then you are no better than hispanics or immagrants taking people jobs because it'll lessen the chance of people even knowing or wanting to become in their life. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79dd4fbdde3a,7C9AA3346458,we need to advance technology to better help people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91b02892a470,7C9AA3346458,people still have their rights and beliefs and you would be crossing the line in my opinion if you were to believe this idea. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fc519aa27370,7C9AA3346458,I say let the professionals handle it who are in some ways the same way cause the computers would be screening us humans when there are other professional humans to relate or more capable of helping someone than a software and if the system goes wrong then what will you guys do then? What i'm trying to say is just let people who can relate and have diplomas for this kind of stuff let them do their jobs ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9bfeed4aa50,7C9AA3346458,stop replacing humans with machines ,Position,Adequate,,,
+af7b5cec1eb2,7CE58A7E90FD,These photo's that were taken by NASA are rock formations. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cefbb51292d1,7CE58A7E90FD,"These photos were taken in 1976, 1998, and in 2001. People thought that the formations were from other living things that are on Mars. Nasa took several pictures of these rock formations because they were shaped like humans. The rock formations starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows and even ended up in haunted grocery store checkot lines for 25 years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fcfb6a54cb88,7CE58A7E90FD,Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f7abbd75941,7CE58A7E90FD,"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef22624374fb,7CE58A7E90FD,What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c65e147b90fb,7CE58A7E90FD,It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That’s a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. After taking several more photographs of these landforms people started to realize that they were natural landforms and not made by other living things. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e825d5e2f6ad,7CE58A7E90FD,NASA put the photots on JPL web sites so that people could see these pictures up close. Few cientisct thought that these artifacts were made by aliens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ee5f46d5e45,7CE58A7E90FD,When NASA first took a picture of these faces they said that the face was staring back at the camera. They looked like Egyptian Pharaoh's. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36ad838cebc9,7CE58A7E90FD,There was no alien monument after all. The pictures actually show a butte or a mesa landforms comman aroiund the American West. These are natural landforms becuase scientitst say that there is no life on Mars. NASA took pictures in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4b18af8ac060,7CE58A7E90FD,If there were objects in the pictures like an airplane on the ground or an Egyptain style pyramid or even a small shak you could see what they were.    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a6c29aa6d62,7CF45AD6A333,"Traveling to Venus is a dangous task.
+
+Even with the right equipment and gear the atmosher of Venus still might not be safe. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63f8bac2bbcf,7CF45AD6A333,"Scientists have been looking into going to Venus.
+
+It has been proven that it is not safe to be on it or near the surface of the plant.
+
+A group of scientist from NASA are looking into inhabiting Venus.
+
+They are sending ships that nobody is on to collect data, but unfortulnlly that ships only lasted a few hours on the planet.
+
+With scientists wanting to send people to Venus to collect data, is a little obsvered in the matter.
+
+The atmospher is not safe even if they are not on the suface of the planet.
+
+This might take years to compelte, but it will take to much of our time to explore and inhabit planets that we can handle. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28aec7502447,7CF45AD6A333,"If there are no more of the planets then we could go to Venus, but we should explore others first to see if they are more suitable for people to live on. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+4aaf45400b7b,7CF49F831E85,"The Facial Action Coding System enables computer to identify human emotions in the article "" Making Mona Lisa Smile"" it is shown that this high tech software can recognize how you are feeling for example if you smile a scanner will send the data to the computer and the main thing that the computer has to know is the mucles you are using because you could actually be mad,sad,disgust,fear,and surprise all at once so this high tech computer sees if you are using zygomatic major then you are smiling but if the person is frowning then that means that they are sad. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+50b56dbf5607,7CF49F831E85,"The Mona Lisa one of the most known peice of art from the Renaissance area made by Leonardo Da Vinci's is said to be the only painting at that time that seems to be a woman smiing but that is false. The Mona Lisa was actually showing more then just a smile she was showing three more different emotion besides happyness. The reason that is because when they took a picture of her and put her face in 3D humans face it showed that she was disgusted,fearful,and angry ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b145f5ab500e,7CF49F831E85,So this computer can be also useful to see what people from the past felt during those time to see if they had any emotions or did they not. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ec2884c936c1,7CF49F831E85,In my conclusion emotion can be easy to find threw high tech software but we as human can see the person emotions to but the only differents is that we see the main picture and not the littlest one's. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d898d8606e26,7D08A1D7086A,"Drivers should not be able to have the use of a cellphone while conducting a vehicle. People die every day in car accidents because they use cell phones while driving. Each year over 330,000 accidents happen due to being distracted over a phone. Studies show that a cell phone puts drivers at a four time greater risk ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1a3dd75e8a8e,7D08A1D7086A,"Although many people support using cell phones while driving, there are evidences and studies showing that the use of a cell phone while conducting a vehicle is dangerous and people should avoid using them while driving. ",Position,Effective,,,
+1840d2619508,7D08A1D7086A,"When driving, sometimes it is difficult to focus on the road, which makes it easy to forget that everyone else shares the roads as well ",Claim,Effective,,,
+355412c3143c,7D08A1D7086A,"Many cannot focus fully on the road and the other vehicles, if one keeps talking on phone consistently while driving. This is what leads to fatal accidents. People may think they can multitask while conducting a vehicle and using their cellular devices but in reality that is not the case. Studies show that no matter how concentrated you may think you are, you cause an accident. Whether it's you hitting something small, making others get into an accident, or yourself hitting another car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca310993a5d4,7D08A1D7086A,Hands-free phones are just as disturbing as holding a phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ae2e6009e2c,7D08A1D7086A,"They both serve the same purpose when it comes to distracting the driver from the road. Although hands-free devices do not increase safety, but causes the same amount of distraction as if one were holding a phone. They both serve the same purpose when it comes to distracting the driver from paying attention to the road. Studies show that the reaction time significantly reduces when paying attention to a phone rather than the road for an aged person. Now imagine how much more this affects an elderly person. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a25782679e4f,7D08A1D7086A,"Many drivers keep their cell phones in their vehicles. However, when it rings, they are not going to ignore it because of how tempted they will be to reach for it. Therefore, they lose all concentration while driving, and all the focus is on the phone ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d137d3c4e10,7D08A1D7086A,"Many States have rightfully stopped local governments from prohibiting cell phone use while conducting a vehicle due to many fatal accidents. Many people continue to do it and not follow the law. In addition, for those people are who to blame for when someone innocent loses their life because of someone else being distracted over their phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba9b4c5f1724,7D08A1D7086A,"Not only should cellular devices be prohibited completely but, the law as well should be changed to not having a device at all while conducting a vehicle. This will prevent many accidents as well as saving many lives. Many people already do not follow the law and maybe never will. Only way they will actually respect the law is if an accidents happens to them or they get caught not obeying the law. Therefore, people should be restricted from using cellular devices while conducting a vehicle. No one wants to go through a terrible accident nor be the reason for a fatality.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8782e016ccd8,7D378AEFD0C3,Imagine you're on a cattle boat about to dock. You are helping by giving the animals away to poor people. Well Luke Bomberger did just that. Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 time and the Pacific Ocean twice to go help peole that were stuggling. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e38292d7332f,7D378AEFD0C3,You should become a Seagoing Cowboy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+530e03ed7167,7D378AEFD0C3,you would help people in need ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83b5a1663528,7D378AEFD0C3,it's a once in a lifetime expirience ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6c18f5d9821,7D378AEFD0C3,it is fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77ca94c11e47,7D378AEFD0C3,being a Seagoing Cowboy is fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1f57607ad77,7D378AEFD0C3,Other might think it isn't fun at all ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b99184ecd00a,7D378AEFD0C3,"However, in the text it states that the cowboys play basketball and volleyball. The text aslo states that they would have table tennis tournaments, boxing, fencing, reading, and they would play games. These details prove that maybe you'll have fun being a Seagoing Cowboy. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2f18a6ed298e,7D378AEFD0C3,I believe that it is an once in a life time expirence ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+181648553229,7D378AEFD0C3,Others might look the other way and think the opposite. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a5c850ea4365,7D378AEFD0C3,"However, Luke said that it was a once in a lifetime expirience ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+74108b70ffd6,7D378AEFD0C3,"Also, in the text it said that Luke got to see the Panama Canal. These details prove that maybe you'll get to see a lot more if you become a Seagoing Cowboy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b6aeff504088,7D378AEFD0C3,I belive that becoming a Seagoing Cowboy helps people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf3d9f9b597c,7D378AEFD0C3,Some people think that you could get hurt yourself then who whould help you? ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+9be48dc4f9f7,7D378AEFD0C3,"However, in the text it states that it helped people who lived in Eurpoe and China. Also, in the text it states that it made people more aware of other people in other countries. These details prove that you could help a lot of people in need. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+65a371c86858,7D378AEFD0C3,", you should become a Seagoing Cowboy because you would help people in need, it is a once in a lifetime expirience, and it is fun. Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantisc Ocean 16 times and the Pacific twice to go help people in need. So, you should go and sign up to become a Seagoing Cowboy ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85c2fe353f8a,7D577B9D3888,"The principal can decide a lot of things, but not decide what a student does before or after school ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9e36d9be4d7a,7D577B9D3888,I disagree with the principal's idea of making all students do one extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c349ea31c054,7D577B9D3888,"First issue is, it extends an already drawn out school day, making the day last an extra hour or two ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+39c2ecb609bd,7D577B9D3888,"Also, a student's talent may not represented in a club, therefore making them feel left out ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+da57a038a686,7D577B9D3888,"Finally, students may have outside of school routines, or work they must do, and this rule interferes with their routine. This idea is taking away a bit more of a student's free will, thus leading to my argument ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+070b09169b38,7D577B9D3888,could make students feel left out because their talent isn't represented ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+294d0d3d401f,7D577B9D3888,"School can already be long and tiring, so there's no need to make it longer for students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cea53650f8b1,7D577B9D3888,"While some may enjoy sports or other extracurricular activities, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+30d1b4beb604,7D577B9D3888,those who do not are wasting their time by doing an activity they may not enjoy. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a6c86c0bf53b,7D577B9D3888,"Some students may be very good in a certain thing, such as writing stories, or sculpting, or some other talent that isn't very popular. This then leads to them having nowhere to go, leaving them with something they don't enjoy. If the school doesn't have a club or activity that suits them, then they shouldn't have to participate in one. If they do, it's just extra work that'll bore them. Clubs are supposed to be enjoyable, and help students find others that have the same interests as them, but if participating in a club or activity is mandatory, students may feel left out, and not included. They may be excluded and picked on for having a talent that others can't relate to,or be picked on for not being good at something. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d7513d0098f,7D577B9D3888,"In the morning, most students have a routine they follow. If they have an activity that begins 45 minutes before school, they have to rearrange their whole schedule. This can lead to them losing sleep, not getting a good enough breakfast, and generally under prepared for school. If a student has an after school activity, this can change and shorten their routine. If they get home, do homework, play games for 2 hours, eat dinner, shower, and then go to sleep, an activity can limit these things to less games or enjoyable activities, not as much of a dinner, and the day being taken up by mostly homework. It can cancel their time to relax or have fun, and cause a routine change. It shouldn't be up to the school to choose a students after or before school life, and throw off their entire schedule. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fbcff3566840,7D577B9D3888,"I disagree with the principal's idea. It lengthens out a long school day, can make students feel left out, and can mess with a student's schedule. It doesn't seem fair for the school to control a student's out of school time. While school is important, it shouldn't be a student's entire life, they need breaks from it. Clubs, activities, and sports are balanced because people who want to be in them join them, not because they have to. Other people can suffer from a student not participating in their activity making it not enjoyable for others. The school shouldn't choose a student's out of school life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3fa450cff31e,7D59699BB70F,One of the advantages of getting rid of cars is traffic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c013ad60faf,7D59699BB70F,"Cars is a major isssue because mostly in the mornings people are tryin to get from one place to another at the same time. This action causes Death,car wrecks,etc. Bogota colombia- In aprogram  thtas set to spread to other countries millions of colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses during a car free day to avoid traffic jams. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+06f53db1f92a,7D59699BB70F,Another cars is a bad idea is because of its gas. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4b9b679d9112,7D59699BB70F,"When people drive or even crank their cars that gac or diesel is goin up into the air causing  our air to become filthy ans cloudy. Diesel or gas is dangerous because it harms the air, people, animals and other things. For example ''It's a good opportunity to take awat stress and lower air pollution'';said business man Carlos Arturo plaza as he rode a two seat bicycle with his wife. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de938e0c18f0,7D59699BB70F,But a good thin about this article is that it says that president obama's ambitious goals to curb the united states ' greenhouse gas emissions unveiled last week will get a fortuitous assist. So basically wat it is trying to say is that eventually a end to cars will come. Since 2005  the number of miles drive have dropped steadily after. over the years people have stooped relying on cars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72a42207034c,7D59699BB70F,As april 2013 the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and eqyal to where the country was in 1995 ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a739cbe8298c,7D59699BB70F,Me myself personally think that people should stop driving cars and start walking or using bikes thats one reason why people are becoming obese because they are relying on cars to get them everywhere they need to go ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+794277b27361,7D59699BB70F,Just imagine that cars were never invented i bet there would be fewer people who would be obese than there is now. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77013d9e8f6d,7D59699BB70F,people should stop relying on cars to get them where they need to and depend on themselves because eventually the end to cars will come. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c62156b58549,7DA8E80C2FAF,"Dont get me wrong cars are a good thing for but we do not need them to live. We use them to get around but look at how much money it costs us in gas and just to bye the car. Plus it is destroying are ecosystem at a alarmingly high rate. Why use cars when we can just walk or bike where we need to go.
+
+So ya we use cars to get around but we dont need them. take a look at this town called Vauban, in Germany ""near the Swiss and French border"". the streets of ""Vauban are completely ""car free"""". so if they can do it why cant we. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d22c3f05bfd3,7DA8E80C2FAF,"""""after five -days of intesifying smog...[the smog] rivaling Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.""""paris enforced a partial driving ban to clesr the air of the global city."" and with all this ""paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (pm) per cubic meter compared with"" ""79.7 in London"". Ok London did a week without cars because of smog but with all the pollution from car emissions that they did not use that week was a lot when u facter in that they had as crapy air as Beijing, China,and they only got rid of half there cars for they week ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ce035d11680,7DA8E80C2FAF,Imagine how mutch cleaner are air would be if we got rid of all are cars for just a week. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc8ae853d3ad,7DA8E80C2FAF,By then we would be used to it so even bring the cars back that right there would keep making are air clean. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb7bc8fc27af,7DA8E80C2FAF,"getting rid of cars for one day ""it's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution"" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6214238d6e7a,7DF12B42AB72,Should these summer projects be teacher designed or student designed? I feel they should be more favored to being student designed. Why would I think that? Why can't teachers determine the design of summer projects? Im going to tell my opinon why. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+38743f2f76d8,7DF12B42AB72,I feel students should be favored in the designing of their summer projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+12c36fdeb46d,7DF12B42AB72,they know what type of schedule they have. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7614255947ce,7DF12B42AB72,"During most summers, students are going with families, going out of state, even sometimes they are going out of the country. If they have their own designed summer projects then they will know when to try and complete the projects on their own time. Plus, students take the summer time to have fun, and if teachers were designing these projects, it would be unfair to cut into the summer of students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e3b76d501384,7DF12B42AB72,"Maybe most teachers feel that if students really cared about learning and school, that it doesn't matter when the project is assigned to you, you should just do it. Also, teachers may think with all the time during the summer, students should have plenty of time to balance managing their summer fun with their summer projects. In some teachers head, I think they may be saying if you care enough to learn and keep your brain and mind focused during the break, doing the projects when they assign they should be no issue at all ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+963e65433760,7DF12B42AB72,"What's the problem with students designing their summer project? It's not hurting anybody, it's at their own type of pace, they are not being rushed into something they may not be ready for, and I could go on and on about it. In the students' mind, they probably think if they design their own time to do the summer projects, when they are done with the assignments, the work will more than likely be more proifficent and way more precise, rather than teachers trying to assign them the assginments at the wrong time for some students. I would that the teachers would take that to head and be more aware of what students have going on. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1c2874a2e491,7DF12B42AB72,"To me, I felt that students had the better argument because at the end of the day, it's really all bout what they think and how they feel. They are the having to do these assignments and a certain time, and actually be expected to put everything to the task. For the familes point of view, knowing that their kid can't have the type of summer they want to have because of these summer projects just doesn't sit right in my book. Lastly, but not leastly, the teachers point of view. I completely understand that even during the break, students should still keep their mind focused, in order to prepare for not only the next school year, but the many years to come after that. But, then again this refers back to the students who have to do the work at a not so good time for them. Honestly, I think their should be no work, or assignments given to students during the summer break. It's really not that not worth if the students aren't going to give their 100% best effort to even try to do it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+14bf19fecf96,7E2EF53A56BC,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author describes why putting a man on the moon seems like a walk in the park compared to the horrendous obstacles preventing humans from pushing the frontier with visiting one of Earth's neighbors, Venus. The thick atmosphere is toxic to us. The clouds of sulfuric acid, the incredibly high temperatures on the planet's surface, and pressure would present challenges to mankind and its technology. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c85c79e6dac7,7E2EF53A56BC,"Yet, the author sees that mankind cannot be afraid of the risks when the rewards are so great. In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ",Position,Effective,,,
+72c87e1a5221,7E2EF53A56BC,"is supported through Venus' vast similarities to Earth, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+95be1b629b36,7E2EF53A56BC,"Venus' proximity to Earth, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6741f9ff5451,7E2EF53A56BC,and the innovation in machines by researchers that could make them work long enough to expand mankind's knowledge on Venus. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+56c257772002,7E2EF53A56BC,"The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is supported through Venus' vast similarites to Earth, which is why humans have such interest in this particular planet. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a071b0f065ab,7E2EF53A56BC,"The author explains points in Venus' history that have intrigued astronomers, ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largelyt with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, "" (4). Besides having been closer to Earth's ""twin"" many years ago, Venus may be more similar than humans thought, shown through ""The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters,"" (4). Studying Venus could lead to us knowing why this planet is such a far cry from Earth now, and this could provide valuable with how humans interact with their environment. If Venus has such similar features to Earth, like valleys, then there is probably more to discover on Venus' surface. This peculiar connection between this planet and Venus shows how valuable exploration could prove, just as Venus' proximity further supports how worthy of a pursuit Venus is. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+80f202be826a,7E2EF53A56BC,"The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the presented dangers is supported through Venus' proximity. The author conveys the usefulness of having Venus so close, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6b617dac7cb6,7E2EF53A56BC,"""Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world,"" (2). Time and distance can be very influential in making groundbreaking decisions, like pursuing the exploration of Venus, as can be seen through, ""...Venus can be sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel,"" (4). Humans love to have everything near by, like schools, work, and more, because of the convenience; the same benefit is seen with Venus. When the planet is close, the fuel needed would not be the same if humans were trying to get to Jupiter. There would be less of a chance of losing them. Time is essential in space, given humans' limited control out there, so proximity makes it that much easier for us to make the bold move. Venus's proximity gives reason to continue working towards exploring Venus, just as the innovations in machines have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1917ccbd0a31,7E2EF53A56BC,The idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it brings is supported through the innovation in machines that could make the close-up exploration of Venus possible. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7a46bc9b8d1c,7E2EF53A56BC,"NASA's advancements for Venus exploration are promising, ""For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such chaos,"" (7). Humans would not be able to use the most advanced technology, but durability is the goal, ""By comparison, systems (mechanical computers that use gears and levers to calculate) that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces,"" (7). If humans were to only hover over Venus, the possibilites are limited. Humans and technology have to be as close as possible. Technology that could last for a few weeks is enough to vastly expand our knowledge. Mechanical computers are now obsolete, but in Venus would be a valuable tool, just like the other electonics being made. Researchers have worked tirelessly to continue making Venus exploration a reasonable reality. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af0caef7923f,7E2EF53A56BC,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is supported through Venus' vast similarities to Earth, Venus' proximity to Earth, and the innovation in machines by researchers that could make them work long enough to expand mankind's knowledge on Venus. The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is supported through Venus' vast similarites to Earth, which is why humans have such interest in this particular planet. The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the presented dangers is conveyed through Venus' proximity. The idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its hostile environment is supported through the innovation in machines that could make the close-up exploration of Venus possible. The author believes that sometimes humans cannot let curiosity, imagination, and innovation be trampled by the dangers and doubts. Humans cannot live in fear all the time. The human spirit always demands that humans continue striving towards knowing more.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cc51202d50b7,7E54AA9ADF2B,"Today, the effect of summer break on students is debated as frequently as politics. Many are convinced that this long break causes students to forget material that they have just learned. Schools have tried to combat this issue in various ways; one way is to require summer projects. This would assure that students continue learning during their break. However, this solution begs the question of if these projects should be designed by the teachers or the students. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+59308eee94ea,7E54AA9ADF2B,"Certainly, these projects should be left to the teacher. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3bbc5e9c74e,7E54AA9ADF2B,"reduce the unnecessary amount of time spent on the project and stress on the students, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b95d308daaaa,7E54AA9ADF2B,"insure the relevancy the project has to the course, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a267a40ad723,7E54AA9ADF2B,guarantee the teacher's help and structured guidelines. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4013b732e787,7E54AA9ADF2B,"The time needed to plan and form a project would be solely on the teacher, not each individual student. This entire process can be very stressful and overwhelming, especially for a student who does not have a degree in the subject. The stress and frustration would continue, especially if a student cannot get approval. A student-designed project would require the student to present their project idea to the teacher for approval. Whereas a teacher-designed project would already be approved, eliminating the hassle of the first few steps in the project making process. For example, a high school student, Generic_Name, is going into an advanced science class. She has the idea to do a project where she will conduct a survey asking different people to pick their preferred flower from a list. The teacher denies her request because it does not reflect the class level. Generic_Name then has to go back and start from square one, frustrated and angry. A student may have to go back again and again, especially frustrated because it is wasting valuable time in the middle of their summer. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+53a18d352ed7,7E54AA9ADF2B,"Students would be unaware of the topics related to the course they are going into, for they have not studied it yet. It would be impossible for them to form a beneficial project related to the subject. A teacher could use this project as a precursor to the unit they will study first, beginning to teach right when they get back to school. The students will have some background on the topic, ready to jump in. The students will then be able to have class discussions on the topic, because they all did the same project and are on the same page. For example, Generic_Name is a rising senior in high school going into an American literature class. He is told that he must complete a project over summer. He decides to read a biography on George Washington and do a report on the book. He has no idea that the first unit in the class is poetry. It would have been more beneficial to Generic_Name and the other students in that class if the teacher was able to assign the project. The teacher could have given the students many Edgar Allen Poe poems and assigned a thrilling project to go along with the mysterious and captivating works of Poe. Coming back from summer break, the class could discuss what they read and share their projects with each other. Having a teacher design a relevant project would unify the class and be a wonderful bridge to aid in the transition from summer into a new school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4368d6a37c28,7E54AA9ADF2B,"With the teacher designing the project, they could make a clear and distinct rubric. This would inform students exactly what the teacher is looking for. It is very difficult to complete a project when you are not sure how it will be graded. Teachers would be able to help students and answer any questions they may have. For example, over the summer, Generic_Name has an assignment to research her favorite U.S. president and write a paper on their life. The teacher provides an over view of the assignment, a list of all the requirements, and a rubric. Generic_Name would like to add a page on the president's children. However, she is not sure if that is allowed, considering that the assignment was only on the president himself. She sends an email to her teacher and asks her question. The teacher is able to answer her question almost immediately, because the teacher knows exactly what they want. The teachers should formulate the projects, so they can assist the students and guide them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a21f5079d2f6,7E54AA9ADF2B,"Some may argue that student-designed projects allow students to have creativity, individuality, and freedom. As a result of these things, students would be more inclined to complete the project; ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3858580d6d33,7E54AA9ADF2B,"however, these self-assigned projects could easily be swept under the rug, especially in the midst of an exciting summer break. More time, thought, and preparation must go into a student designed project, discouraging students from setting aside appropriate time to devote to the project, because they view it as too challenging. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d668757b1a61,7E54AA9ADF2B,", summer projects should be designed by teachers. This would be more beneficial to both students and teachers. The teachers would be able to assign projects that are relevant to their lesson, relating their summer work to the unit they will be studying first, allowing them to be able to start learning as soon as they get back to school. During the months of summer break, the last thing that students want is the stress of a project. It would be much easier and less stressful if the teachers designed the project to reduce the amount of preparation needed from the students. The teachers would give the students clear guidelines, and then be able to help the students because they have a distinct idea of what they are looking for. Summer projects should be teacher-designed to insure the relevancy of the project, guarantee structured guidelines, and limit the unnecessary stress for students.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+646034466f6a,7E6236F28B06,"Venus, as the author talks about, was a worthy pursuit becuase they had found very good and ineresting findings ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c671ec58335f,7E6236F28B06,The author believes them because they have such good outcmomes of the new findings ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+013b56c50525,7E6236F28B06,"As the author talks about in paragaph 8 it says,""Been tested in a chamber simulation the chaos of Venus. "" This meaning to this is how many things had been tested and seen. Therefore they are dicovering new stuff in this century ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9400c146c322,7E6236F28B06,"Another reason is on paragrpah 8 it states,""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cb95282574b,7E6236F28B06,"This is explaining how the person doesnt liked the job or does. They are passionate able the stuff they do. As they look into more of Venus, the more excitement is shown and shared. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b4e712f411d,7E6236F28B06,"Overall, the author knows how harmful these stuff could be, but they just love how they make a discovery, which is worthy. They feel as to being one step ahead by testing them and keep testing them so they are able to come out with an outcome of something more epic and worthyly of Venus and its dicovering which made it itself a worthy pursuit. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a6cadedf037f,7E873F1E93C2,"Whether it's playing sports, participating in student council, school plays, or just painting in art club, all teens and students need that extra confidence, and adrenaline boost that extracurricular activities provide. Principle of Generic_School, Generic_Name, is proposing a new, controversial school rule that states, ""All students at BRMS
+
+must participate in at least one extracurricular activity throughout the year."" Should his rule be enforced or shot down? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+aeee8b065f4e,7E873F1E93C2,"If you were to compare the pros and cons, the answer is yes! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cefebf240bd2,7E873F1E93C2,"Not only will this rule be beneficial to all of the students physical and mental health, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd2f0a48e4ce,7E873F1E93C2,but forcing kids to branch out and do extracurricular activities will bring them out of their shell and mold them into a better person. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a6e874b31d0c,7E873F1E93C2,"By forcing students to participate in activities that they may not have signed up for on their own, they are forced out of their shell and meet new people who share similar passions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+024224b137a6,7E873F1E93C2,"In a pole taken at Southern Utah Middle School, the students were asked approximately how many friends they had and generally how they met. The study discovered that most students who were involved in clubs, student council, sports, and etc. answered with higher numbers of friends, many of which they made through their out of school activities. This shows that you don't only just learn a trade catered to your interests, but you also meet lots of new people who share those interests and become your closest relative friends. You could even meet your soul mate! At Harvard University, the students studied married couples and found that over 70% of their top ten passions and interests were shared, that's 7 out of 10! Forming bonds with new people can help with trust and relationship issues and can all be done through simply being forced to branch out and participate in an extracurricular activity at your school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56f65dc1ef51,7E873F1E93C2,Another meaningful reason for the students to be forced to enjoy extracurricular activities is because of their mental and physical health. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+caadf83ab5e2,7E873F1E93C2,"World renown author of several New York Times awarded self-help books, doctor, and psychiatrist, Leonard Steigerwald explains, ""Getting involved in clubs, sports, and other extracurricular activities can not only boost your physical health, but mental too."" Steigerwald is stating the obvious, when students participate in sports, or even a poem writing club, they are staying physically, and mentally active. Being around other people can also help keep you mentally healthy. A recent news story even further investigates this topic, New York resident, Flynn Engstrom, was visiting a relative in Colorado when he got lost on a hike. He was missing for a month and six days and when the police found him, he was in a desperate state. He was so happy to see people that he began to cry uncontrollably. He remembered, ""I was longing to see humans again. I barely had food, or clean water and in my weak mental state, I began to imagine things,"" he shuddered, ""Horrible things that I had convinced myself were real. Seeing those officers, [I] felt my sanity pouring back into my mind."" Although this story is quite an extreme example. If students are just sitting at home all day after school on their phones, their confidence and motivation to do anything will begin to dwindle. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+654dcded37e0,7E873F1E93C2,"Having a clear head space has been proven to help with academics, and participating in extracurricular activities has proven to help clear your mind. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7ecd00d367f8,7E873F1E93C2,"In 2017 students who are active in their community and school were proven to have better SOL, SAT, and just overall grades. GPAs in Colleges have been harder to meet as far as the 110% of all the valedictorians from high schools around the globe. Getting involved in out of or in school activities can look good on job applications, college applications, and can just generally give you motive when you are having a hard time in life. Professor at the University of Utah in Northern Canada, Jillian Hooper explains, ""Everyday I see students struggle with their grades, and everyday the only ones who can bounce back are those who take a break, and spend time volunteering, practicing a sport, or any other extracurricular activity, it's vital for these college students."" She wants people to understand that activities can be beneficial. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ddbc04f4989c,7E873F1E93C2,"
+Although it's pretty clear that Generic_Name's rule should be passed, it was mentioned earlier to be controversial. This is because several parents and students at Generic_School say that this rule is infringing on their right to pursue happiness. The Constitution clearly states, when listing the rights of all U.S. citizens, ""The pursuit of happiness"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f84f0c265de4,7E873F1E93C2,"however there are certain exceptions to this law. In schools, students are required to take SOLs and other tests. Do SOLs make students happy? No. Unfortunately though, it is required in schools. Requiring extracurricular activities is quite on the contrary. Instead of going home and ""pursuing happiness"" on their phones, the teens would be able to occasionally stay after school with friends and do something that they care about. The Physical Education Council in Western Loudoun County in Virginia conducted a study with some interesting results. The tracked the brains levels of happiness through the process of cells creating a natural sort of nicotine. When this chemical is released in the brain, it causes the feeling that humans identify as, ""being happy"". The study proved that the chemical was released more often in those who were social and around other people rather then loners, who study, work, and text by themselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+75127b7887fe,7E873F1E93C2,"This means that when students participate in activities with others, they are actually happier and mentally healthier. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+0b96d7992f86,7E873F1E93C2,"In the end, the rule should be passed and all students should be required to participate in extracurricular activities. It will not only be beneficial for their mental health, happiness, and social life, but also for academics and physical activity.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3f2b65a57257,7E97F03304F1,The use of this technology to read the emotional expression of students in a classroom IS valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f0a0288c61a8,7E97F03304F1,"it is valuable to read students emotions expression because if a student is sad and just wants to be left alone, or if a student is so mad and will go off for any reason then the teacher will know to leave those students alone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd1ffab0e27b,7E97F03304F1,Another reason why the emothional expressions is that if they are in a play and you want they to actually feel those feelings. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01ef29d4bb25,7E97F03304F1,you can tell if that person is being truthful or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b05edd84a204,7E97F03304F1,"First off the reasion you can use this technology to read emotional expressions is that Dr. Huang and his clleagus are experts that developed a new emotional - recongition software that tracks these facial movements, with characteristics movements of the facial muscules. For example is the text it states ""your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger."" This is how that computer knows how you are feeling, by look at your muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e3b5fa9317d,7E97F03304F1,If they did have the emotional expressions inside of the class room then you will be able to tell if the student is telling the truth or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fed66f0c115d,7E97F03304F1,By that you will know for sure of the student is lying to you or not and you'll figure out a way to punich them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b19b7faece09,7E97F03304F1,Second if you want the kids to really feel something and want to make sure they feel it then you'll know. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5d8998ff2bc,7E97F03304F1,So this is why I think this technology to read emotional expressions of students inside the classroom. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1891b819e9a1,7EAB25FDB984,The face on Mars is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+14ebfeb79031,7EAB25FDB984,I think this because the face reminds someone of middle butte in the snake river plain of Idaho. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eae975a6a373,7EAB25FDB984,"Just becuase the face is in movies and magazines do not make it true their is lots of story in magzines that is not true. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+25c3096093f2,7EAB25FDB984,"If this was a face,The face would have been gone after 25 years later. The picture may look like a face but its just a landform. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+91fdaf840238,7EAB25FDB984,"I think the face is just a landform bacause the picture is actually showing is a mesa lanform that can be mistaken by a face.
+
+The face on mars can be related to some things on earth like the middle of the butte in the snake river plain of Idaho. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6c88a7be0bd,7EAB25FDB984,When someone had made the picture larger the face just looked more and more like a mesa or a butte landform ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6bc239638f6e,7EAB25FDB984,"Micheal malin went to take more pictures which was more clear and he found out that it is just a natural landorm. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+490deab85599,7EAB25FDB984,I'm not the only one who believes that the face on mars is just a lanform ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f9c8793674e,7EAB25FDB984,"a scientist want more proof of this so went to take more pictures and he found out the true about this face. For the people who believes the face is real just go to JPL web site, you can find better picture of it and you will see what I'm see. Which is just a landform mistaken for an alien face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f426f41cf4b,7EAB25FDB984,These are some reason why you should believe me when i said the face is just a landform nothing else not and alien face or an human face. I understand why someone would think this is a alien face because the first picture was not so clear and it did look like a face. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6b287eabc2ef,7EC34F21069A,"As the years go by,  so does the evolution of automobiles and the effect it carries in our environment. Technology changes the way we move and interact with one another, some for the better and others for the worst. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e8eee1856e70,7EC34F21069A,Limiting car usage will help individuals carry themselves in their environment ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8b90c2d93113,7EC34F21069A,it will cause less pollution ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6aa7001f0b9c,7EC34F21069A,less accidents. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b2e3f9e095a4,7EC34F21069A,"Earth's atmosphere is slowly starting to change due to the fact that chemicals and gases are being released from your very own car. As Amercia's population increases so do the risk of the the greenhouse gases, resulting in global warmming and the lost of some habbitats. ""If the pattern persists .... it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants"",(Rosenthal 34). Stopping the usage of cars in our society will help protect not only ourselves but also the lives of those with whom you share with. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c8a76948081,7EC34F21069A,"
+Imagine lossing your loved one in a car accident and never hearing from her or him again. As Amercia's population starts to increase so those it's migration stream, resulting in manufactoring and labor cost. If more cars are being released into our living, the lives of those in which we care will soon never be seen again ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b90b6abcebc2,7EC34F21069A,Limiting the usage of cars with help keep our enviromnet/society accident free and see those familar faces which we saw as we grew up. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+92f2c8745d49,7EC34F21069A,When technology changes so does our ideas and perspective on our surroundings. Congestion causes stress and reduces the chance of a clear sky. Car usage changes the lives of many as well as impacts in what we care about and what we don't care about. Limiting car usage will help individuals carry themselves in their environment because it will cause less pollution and less accidents.                    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5f63b9a716e6,7EDF56FCB4AC,sports is better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9de751be747,7EDF56FCB4AC,so you can have more fun and so you don't have to get more tired from staying home and playing video games all day i just want to go outside to play more sports and get some fresh air and lose some of your body weight. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea765263dd92,7EDF56FCB4AC,year book is a picture from the book ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e78d167f8f2,7EDF56FCB4AC,you where a little boy and a teen and a young age and see you in elemtrey school and middle school and high school and they will see you at collage and think about where you at now think when you where as a young age and think when you where famous. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28cc7feefbb8,7EDF56FCB4AC,activity is for a after school clubs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21be54d062c8,7EDF56FCB4AC,there are good at clubs and so you can play soccer in there and they have basketball and they have computer lab that is for play video games that is just for fun and if you done after school clubs you have to find a way to go home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14f1baff4bf5,7EDF56FCB4AC,council is a video game ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c0b5cb4a813b,7EDF56FCB4AC,so can everyone can join play video games and everyone plays online and play your friends and other people and some people don't play online because iit thinks it is so bad to play and it think is and for your eyes and it thinks you can get color blind and it has bad words on the council and they have other people abuse other people as will. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99ae9e342656,7EDF56FCB4AC,principal and they have nice atute and they have good teacher and they will check your grades and how will you do in your classes and they check on other teachers rooms. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d334c62d027,7EDFBE24CF70,"In "" The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus is interesting, helpful, and it is safe ",Position,Effective,,,
+891992f22604,7EDFBE24CF70,"The passage tells about how the planet Venus can improve and is useful. Venus could be dangerous, but there are many more reasons that Venus is a good oppurtunity to research on. There are many new discoveries not yet found. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0c6f17784ce,7EDFBE24CF70,There are many interesting things about Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d4f6ddb6474,7EDFBE24CF70,"First of all, Venus is the second planet from our sun. In paragraph 2, it states,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" Second of all, Venus atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The conditions are far more extreme than what human encountered. Third of all, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. There might be additional volcanoes and powerful earthquakes. Last of all, Venus is called the "" Evening Star."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1fa952d15e26,7EDFBE24CF70,Venus is a helpful planet because of its characteritics ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21fb82e373cb,7EDFBE24CF70,"First of all, often Venus is refered to as Earths ""twin"". By stating that its saying that the planet Venus is just like the planet Earth. Second of all, If Venus is the same as Earth, then it would be possibe for people to visit and see the place. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ab656e7b63d,7EDFBE24CF70,"In paragraph 3 It states that,"" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus."" Third of all, it has higher carbon dioxide, so it is helpful for us. Last of all, Venus might be useful to us someday in the future. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+11e782054a85,7EDFBE24CF70,The planet Venus is a safe place because of all the facts that is stated in the passage. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac4a65c2bb05,7EDFBE24CF70,"First of all, If Earth is a safe place for us, then Venus would be too. Even the astronomers are fascinated of how much both the planets are alike. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e7d4769d526,7EDFBE24CF70,"Second of all, Venus could someday be our second home or a place where we can visit. In the passage it states, ""Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38cbe8b831cc,7EDFBE24CF70,"Third of all, Venus is safe because the NASA has been doing experiments and testing on stuffs. NASA has been experimenting it on with inventions. Last of all, scientists even seek to conduct a thorough mission about Venus. By doing that scientists can understand more aboout the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2442e22951fd,7EDFBE24CF70,"In conclusion, Venus is interesting, helpful, amd safe. Venus has been tested out and has been experimented on. By the experiments people can tell whether its safe or not. After finishing the passage, Venus is an environment which everyone would enjoy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+63791aaa8f10,7EECF753189D,"Have you ever seen an alien? In 1976 the camera weren't as good as today so it could be anything. But today the cameras are great quality. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+60c9c2c6a2fa,7EECF753189D,Back then you would have thought that it was an alien but today we clearly saw that it was just a landscape and not an alien ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00c4f89f24b8,7EECF753189D,Its like the man it the moon it is just a landscape it is nothing big at all. By saying that it is an alien people today would probally believe that it is true they would go crazy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b4c319fcae3,7EECF753189D,But we found evindence that the first Viking was wrong and the it is just a moutain. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e7938c85059,7EECF753189D,"Now a days we have new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry ,but back then they didn't have that kind of technology ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3428854ebe71,7EECF753189D,Technology today can take ten times better pictures then back in 1976. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a7eecffef5e,7EECF753189D,As the world grows faster in technolog we can expect better and better pictures but we found evindence that on Mars there is no life forms ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3733c08ab452,7EECF753189D,"So as far as we know their are no such thing as aliens. On Mars there might be pictures or thing that looklike an alien but its not it a fairytale our mind thinks it saw one but you never did. As i was saying there is no lifeform on mars, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fadd308553e1,7EECF753189D,Technology has delvoped over the years. From when the first sight of a camera to now it will always evolve into something better. Technoogy is the only thing will always change into something different.           ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6994d7503d44,7F220FD6CACF,The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1f1df9e39dfe,7F220FD6CACF,"Some students want there emtions to them selfs and want to know there emitons. ''She's 82 percent happy. 9 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry."" This new technology can calculate your emtions like math. Also using ''video imagery, the new emtion-recognition software tracks these facial movments - in a real face or in the painrted face of Mona Lisa.'' It can define the emotion of a real human and in a painting. There technology is very intresting they construct a 3-D computer model to the face. instead of humans trying to find out calculations them selfs they can use the new technology. Humans can perform the same way as the new technology even tho they are gonna have to estimate the percentigs ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3353637e9b50,7F220FD6CACF,"Also can tell when children or students are tired or bored or falling as sleep so then the technolgy '' could modity the lesson, like and effective human instructor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+42b16ad9dfe1,7F220FD6CACF,The same technology can make computers-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery.'' so it can keep the students on track and still learn on there school lessons and wont get behind. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emtions. Students can change there face exprishions but the new technolgy can tell that not there real expertion. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d54903bc5dc6,7F220FD6CACF,The new use of this technology to read the emtional expersions of students is a good idea. The technology will be a helpful thing in the near future for all of the school to keep the studetns on track and wont get lost on there lessons. this new technolgy wlll help students alot. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8be043837542,7F513E5DA945,The use of this technology in a classroom would be useful ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a6d403685ba,7F513E5DA945,"because it can help teachers identify how a student is feeling, if the are confused, and if the need help ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fcec5395121,7F513E5DA945,"For example,"" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" Dr. huang predicts. "" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrucuture."" This is really helpful to some students because when taking an online lesson some of them might be comfused and the teacher is no there to help. So the computer can take these facial expresions and modify the lesson so you could undestand it better. This also follows along if a student needs help with the lesson, the computer could see you are having a hard time and t to help you by changing the lesson ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cacf56b34f21,7F513E5DA945,Also it could help teachers identify emotions by the facial expresion. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+740d88501ca2,7F513E5DA945,"""You can tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait."" 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce3b0702eeca,7F513E5DA945,If the student is acting up the teacher can use this new technology to see if the student is sad or angry. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+34b03c88591b,7F513E5DA945,"Then she can ask the student if everthing is okay or if he needs to talk to someone. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76f8380b692c,7F513E5DA945,"In conclusion the new technology would be usful in a classroom because it can help teachers identify how a student if feeling, if they are confused, and if they need help. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+40eb8a79db61,7FB02EF0CF58,"There are some students that would enjoy extracurricular activities, and some students that will despise it. Some students might like different activities then the other, but would extracurricular activities really benefit the students lifestyle? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2ceb0e641a85,7FB02EF0CF58,I agree and disagree with the principals decision. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7fe9c3890e5f,7FB02EF0CF58,"First, I agree with this decision because, if students are interested on a extracurricular activity, then I think that they should totally do it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3091d44d2d3e,7FB02EF0CF58,"When a student joins a school club, a sport after school, or do service hours, they will be able to have an experience on what it's like. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+194735566d74,7FB02EF0CF58,"Also, they would be able to make more friends and would be more active and social to others. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+31c2a04e237e,7FB02EF0CF58,"If the student is some what shy or is trying out something new, then they can open up with others and would try to be comfortable with the environment and the way they cope. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28fe295ff445,7FB02EF0CF58,some students would not have the time to be able to join an extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cf7432e8905,7FB02EF0CF58,"they can either be working on homework, or they have something important they have to do after school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dec48b2af92d,7FB02EF0CF58,"Also, some parents would also not have the time to pick their kids up from the after school activity. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f35a31c5493,7FB02EF0CF58,Parents may not have the money to put their child into an extracurricular activity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8dad3ab09a8,7FB02EF0CF58,"First, some after school clubs you need to be payed for, like theater and most sports. Most parents can't afford to pay a certain amount of money to put their child in a after school activity. Parents need to provide money to pay their rent, electricity and water bills. High school and college students are starting to buy things with their own money that they work for, and some students wouldn't be able to pay for an after school program. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c716281179b,7FB02EF0CF58,"In conclusion, I think that is really depends on how your family copes with it and your schedule. Most students will have the time for extracurricular activities and others don't have the time to. This is why I think that It depends on the students schedule.           ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5bfe3990851b,80031EC3D9B6,"From small town suburbs to largely populated cities, car usage can drastically affect a community. In developed worlds, personal automobiles are an increasingly popular trend, and help people go about their day to day business. Many would rather drive down the street to a grocery store of job instead of walking there even though it is common knowledge that the pollution and other harmful emissions cars create is bad for the enviroment and the people living there. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+649fd9c6766b,80031EC3D9B6,"The question remains, what are the advantages of limiting car usage? ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+77d89b84827c,80031EC3D9B6,"Many believe that automobiles, especially the very popular ""car"", can be very bad for the enviroment. According to the article, ""Paris bans driving due to smog"", it explains how near-record pollution within Paris caused a partial driving ban. This was to help clean the smog infested air in the dense city. Although many delivery companies complained about lost revenue, congestion within the capitcal lowered by 60 percent. By Monday that week, ""the smog cleared enough for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on tuesday"". In another article called ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"", this one tells how Bogota, Columbia has also banned cars to promote alternate transportation and reduce smog. The ban is only for one day a year (called The Day Without Cars), but it's helped cause the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, new, smoot sidewalks, less traffic, and new restaurants and shopping areas. Business man, Carlos Plaza claims ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3a4ca864a95,80031EC3D9B6,Both of these articles explain how limiting car usage in a city can be benificial to both the city and its residents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7f5e351c3eb,80031EC3D9B6,"On the other hand, some believe that less cars is NOT benificial. In source four, it claims that the lowered amount of people driving automobiles will be harmful to the profits of the car industry. To further explain, ""companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves 'mobility' companies with a broader product range beyond the personal vehicle"". ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fed778d09da0,80031EC3D9B6,"This, without a doubt, is to combat the loss of sales and encourage people to continue buying their products. However, thos is pretty much all there is on the negative side of limited car usage. For the rest of the community, this doesn't affect them and is in fact quite benificial. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+772d9cdcbbf5,80031EC3D9B6,"Cars, both the rose and the thorns in a community and enviroment, can be both benificial and harmful to people, depending on who you are. For most regular pedeastrians and citizens within a city, less cars means less pollution, traffic, and stress. Unless you are a business owner of a car dealership or working for a delivery company, limited car usage means very postive things for social relationships, health, the enviroment, and general living conditions of a busy city. The less harmful emissions of gases from cars could greatly affect the outcome of our clean, energy efficient future.            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+795cae678e3d,8003F62C4A0C,"Today, many humans own and operate cell phones on a daily basis. The introduction of the modern-day cell phone has made life easier. The cell phone has improved communication between individuals despite the distance. Cell phones have also made receiving information easier for the user when lacking understanding on a certain subject. In other words, the invention has made life more convenient, which resulted in dependence on the object. However, there must be a limitation to the usage of the object, especially when using the cell phone at that time can be life threatening. One of the many times that a cell phone should not be operated is while driving. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3f65e3fd7ad5,8003F62C4A0C,Drivers should not be allowed to use cell phones in any capacity while operating a vehicle because the action is extremely dangerous for every person on the road. ,Position,Effective,,,
+bd36c3872c25,8003F62C4A0C,"According to the studies conducted by the National Safety Council, it was shown that using a cell phone while driving has led to 1.6 million crashes each year with 390,000 of them resulting in injuries. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fb461357d77f,8003F62C4A0C,"The reasoning behind this is when the driver takes their attention away from the road, the dangerousness of the situation increases by 400%. During the time the driver looks down at their phone to check a message, read the GPS, or receive a phone call, an accident can occur. Therefore, to prevent any accidents, all distractions must be eliminated, such as cellular devices. Moreover, by eliminating all distractions, the safety of everyone on the road is increased 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+03d2493e6ab4,8003F62C4A0C,"After the realization of how dangerous the operation of a cellular device is while driving, more states started to amend laws against the action. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69954c1ef9ad,8003F62C4A0C,"As stated by the Governors Highway Safety Association, 47 out of 50 states and the District of Columbia have outlawed texting and driving.
+
+As a consequence, violating the law can result in a large fine and even facing prison time depending on the state. The laws showed some form of effectiveness as the rate of traffic deaths among adults decreased. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4034cf42f948,8003F62C4A0C,Some may argue that using a cellular device should be allowed on the pretense that the driver is using the device as a GPS. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0e8d15f61c14,8003F62C4A0C,"This, however, is not true. Even though the driver is using the device for navigation, the probability of an accident occurring when distracted is still 400%. The GPS defense will also be used as a justification for operating a phone while operating a vehicle. Through the form of loopholes, drivers will use the GPS excuse against police officers to avoid the ticket. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+68d80dcd7bec,8003F62C4A0C,"The different sides of texting and driving, whether to allow it or not, is an irrational debate. The debate between the sides is a debate between what is right and safe versus what is fun yet dangerous. Many laws and economic consequences have been set into place to avoid the death and destruction of using a cell phone while operating a vehicle that can take place. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+83cd83bfeea7,8003F62C4A0C,"In addition, cell phone providers have also run campaigns against the lethal act. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dbf668aa0def,8003F62C4A0C,"While ignorance is bliss and most drivers highly doubt the possibility of an accident because of using a phone while driving, there is still a 400% chance of crashes occurring due to being distracted. Laws being passed to establish security among citizens are in vain due to the ignorance of people that do not care about the risks. They do not only put themselves in danger, but the driver is also responsible for the passengers, pedestrians, and the other people on the road. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0187373fa1b9,802C65A883AC,One day when they were seing how to lande they spoted a face on the red planet mars. It all started like this there were viking 1 was looking for a clear space so his siter viking 2 could lande in the planet mars. So they were looking with the ship camaro to see for a clear spot when they spoted some thing looking straight at the camara and they took a picture because they dint knew what it was. So when they got back home they took a copy of it so the scientist could see what it was. Then when they were looking at it the said it was a face and then everyone started asking queestion. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a97c2eab9bcd,802C65A883AC,"it wasent the body it was just a humen head with""form shadows given illisuin in eye its nose and mouth"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+baf545646199,802C65A883AC,So when they saw it had all the stuff they whent back to se it again whe the misioon was over for the viking 1 and viking 2 ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d9dde8bb0ad,802C65A883AC,.Also this time there camara system was way beter then imn 1988 so they took some more photographgs .Then when they came back they kept on studieng it even more and it took them aloong time to figer it out untile whan day the finally knew what it was. So they setteld a miting for everyone come back in one place and when everyone was ready ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6853e4aefdc3,802C65A883AC,the scientist said that it was just the dust that had made a pile of mountin making it look like it was a humen face so they said it was just a natural landform. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cba4aacb547d,802C65A883AC,"So when that hapend every one was bumed because they thought that they had actully found live in a nother planet called the red planet.
+
+So everyone was happie because they actully thought they found live in mars but the dint. After that they just left the mission stuff were they were because they were sad because there was no live they just left every thing were it was. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66d592d582b5,802C65A883AC,So what the picture actully shwode was the martin equivalent of a butt or mesa land forms common around the american ,Position,Adequate,,,
+324379cb9402,802C65A883AC,After all that hapend the whole story was about the face and mars and if there was live.        ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+81bc395f2c59,80373BDFB665,"Cell phones are becoming more and more included in our daily lives. From communication, to making and watching videos. They are very essential to us and our day to day schedule. But shouldn't let them ruin our lives either. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5d08802194bc,80373BDFB665,"As they say ""There is a time and place for everything"" (Gloria Tesch), and driving is not the time and place ",Position,Effective,,,
+4db978a6acec,80373BDFB665,"According to sources, in 2011 out of 1.3 million car crashes, at least 23% of those crashes involve cell phones. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e7c54d81429c,80373BDFB665,"A lot of these drivers reported that they were texting and driving during the time of the accident. The rest reported to have been talking on the phone. Majority of the vehicles that were involved were light trucks and motorcycles. More than 3/4 of drivers said they would likely answer calls while driving and rarely consider traffic situations when deciding to use a cell phone. Most drivers said they would answer a call or text while driving but would feel unsafe as a passenger if the driver was texting. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+37740869e441,80373BDFB665,"For instance, statistics are stating that gender and age play a huge role in these accidents. Statistics state that females use their phone while driving more than men. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d82ca5aa521,80373BDFB665,People try to say that teens or novice drivers are the reason for all these accidents. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+70593c55961b,80373BDFB665,But according to the data ages 30-39 year olds are the main source of the deaths and drivers ages 15 - 19 had the highest percentage of distracted drivers - 16% of those involved in accidents were distracted. The percentage of fatalities linked to distracted drivers increased from 10% in 2005 to 16% in 2009. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+320496b78052,80373BDFB665,Majority of the states have made laws to try to ensure the safety of americans. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0698cddb2ec9,80373BDFB665,"No state bans all cellphone use for all drivers, but 39 states and D.C. ban all cell phone use by novice drivers, and 20 states and D.C. prohibit it for school bus drivers.
+
+Washington was the first state to pass a texting ban in 2007. Currently, 48 states, D.C., Puerto Rico, Guam and the U.S. Virgin Islands ban text messaging for all drivers. All but three have primary enforcement. Of the two states without an all-driver texting ban, one prohibits text messaging by novice drivers. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aefd8494c08d,80373BDFB665,"
+In conclusion, texting and driving is not safe at all. It takes away people that are not deserving of the pain that they're receiving. Laws and regulations have been set to try and help lower the deaths caused by using cell phones and driving. Life would go much smoother if people just listened and played their part. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+afbbf6b8e6f6,8058E20D84BF,"Growing up going to school, I always looked forward to summer break. It was my time to be free and to be a kid again. Going to the beach, family cookouts, and hanging out with friends are things I always looked forward to doing. Each summer would be better then the last. Until my mom got that call from my school, reminding her about our summer break project. She would bother me nonstop, asking me thousands of questions about it daily. Looking back to my past summers I never once did a student-designed project. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8e35b1315e4f,8058E20D84BF,If schools were to change summer projects to student-designed instead of teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6ae5a5a059a4,8058E20D84BF,students would do subjects that they are interested in resulting in more projects being completed ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d0c87b95dcd4,8058E20D84BF,students would be able to pick a subject that they know they are good at rather then them doing something they have no experience with. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b4a17cd18365,8058E20D84BF,"Throughout my years in school I never once did a summer project that I was truly interested in. Most projects made us read a certain book and summarize it in some unique way. Every summer, one after another, we did the same type of project. Over and over again, reading a book and summarizing it. Those projects started to get boring and some summers I didn't even do them. Students never got a choice with anything. We didn't get to choose what project we did, we didn't get to choose if we worked with a group, we didn't even get to choose what book we did our report on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aabf2d926e65,8058E20D84BF,"In the past I have come across many assignments including projects, homework, and classwork that I have gotten terrible grades on because I had no idea what to do or what they were even talking about. When the teachers are designing the summer projects they are following the guidelines of their boss or school district. They don't think about how well the students know it. They don't think about the future and what the students grades are going to be. They think about one thing and one thing only, designing the project and designing it right. If students were able to design their summer project the grades would be so much better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+177820ac2021,8058E20D84BF,"Teachers could say, ""These projects are simple, your just reading a book and answering easy questions."" What if some students can't actually read? What if some students just aren't good with English in general? ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+cd84640d2bf2,8058E20D84BF,Teachers need to stop categorizing all students and start looking at us one by one. Teachers should know each students strength one by one but they don't. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dce126fb4d0f,8058E20D84BF,Summer break is a time for laughter and fun. Summer break is a break from school. Students shouldn't have to stress the fact that they have a project due on the first day of school. Specially a project that is challenging and overall boring. Teachers have no intent on making the projects interesting or easy for the students. They honestly just want to get it done so they can go on their break as well. Allowing students to design the summer break projects would be a step in the right direction.  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2b9d1c2506be,80591C680EBC,"Many people believe the face on Mars is an extraterrestrial being. Although it may seem true, the face is a natural landform. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+20ed86497d8b,80591C680EBC,There are many facts to show this is a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a9ecdfefcfe9,80591C680EBC,"Many scientists have seen this face as life on Mars. Some conspiracy theorists have said there is life on Mars,and NASA is trying to hide it from the people. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f5f2b93ff2fa,80591C680EBC,"In 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over the face, but they revealed there was no face to be seen. There was only a natural landform. Scientists have began to lose hope of ever seeing the face again. If they were ever able to find the face again, they would have money to do more investigation. Although there were no extratrrestrial beings, people still believed the face would soon appear again. Scientists are still trying to look for ways to explain it all. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d855f6da95a7,80591C680EBC,"Reasearchers are still looking for the face on Mars. Scientist Jim Garvin states, ""So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes an the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were !"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8a7b29083882,80591C680EBC,"He is comparing airplanes, pyramids,and small shacks to the face which is no longer there. This statement proves that the face is a natural landform. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+76df3031cc41,80591C680EBC,"Many landforms on Earth form then after years or even decades, they decay down to nothing. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a837a6c9b003,80591C680EBC,"Although landforms are always forming, they are also being destroyed. Without oxygen on Mars, there is no way the face is able to survive. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7b036bcdb17,80591C680EBC,"Although the face is not real and is a natural landform, researchers will stop at nothing to prove it is real. Conspiracy theorists are still trying to find the truth. Little do they know the truth has been revealed, the face is just a natural landform. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f9a8df0d71bb,806100760821,"Cars. Everyone has cars. On the street, in their driveways, in parking lots. You think everyone uses car. Well your wrong ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+506d50ff6de9,806100760821,Not everyone has cars or uses cars for that matter. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+04a67f5318f1,806100760821,"In Vauban, Germany residents given up their cars to walk the streets. Where we generally park in like parking lots, parking garages, street parking, home driveways, and home garages are all forbidden. In Vauban their streets are completely car-free. They do allowed cars there but some people just want to walk to safe their community. But if you have are car you can only park in two places. Those two places are your house, and large garages at the edge of the development. I would never give up my car to live in Vauban, Germany. In matter of fact 57% of people have sold their cars to live there. To believe or not 70% of Vaubans families do not own cars. To me its hard to think that people actually walk everywhere they go. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56d69ea0366d,806100760821,"Paris bans driving to clean the air of the global city because of pollution. Due to the ban of driving people who are caught driving will be fined 22-euro which is $31 in america. France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Its hard to believe that diesels make up 67% of France, compared to 53.3% of average diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe. The smog cleared enough that French part rescind to ban odd numbered plates on Tuesday. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f5bae7b7d29,806100760821,"Today Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions. This thing has left people like researchers woundering a fundamental question "" Has America pass peak driving?"" As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was neraly 9% below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95d68fd14b6e,806100760821,"Its carzy how some countries have no cars allowed policy. Some countries baned cars, dont allow them on the streets. People would go carzy if they didnt have their cars and had to walk everywhere they want to go ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a8a1026320b,807DA420BA94,"Isn't it strange that cars are one of the most used transporting verhicles around? Well, of course besides busses, trains, airplanes, and all that. Almost everyone has a car, or adleast knows someone who does. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+738fbbc5a19c,807DA420BA94,"Unfortunatley, in German Suburbs life goes on without cars. The Vauban's streets are completely ""car-free"" so the article says. They say car owner ship is allowed but there are only two places to park, large garages but that would take up to $40,000. Also, along with a home. 70% of people in the Vaubans family believe that life is better with out cars, of course they do not own cars. 57% sold a car to move here. In 2006 there was a growing trend in Europe, The United States, and else where to seperate suburban life from auto use. They call this ""Smart Planning"" Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in car-intensive areas in the United States.
+
+Vauban. Home to 5,500 people within a rectaugular square mile, may be the most experimented place with low-car suburban life. Levittown and Scarsdale, New York suburbs spread-out homes and private places (such as garages, homes, etc) They were the dream towns of 1950s and still and exert a stong appeal. But some new suburbs look like the Vaubans. Not only in developed countries but also in the developing world. The United States, the Enviornmental Protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communties. Meaning the lack of usage with cars. In previous bills, 80 percent or appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent go towards other transport. On Monday, motorists were ordered to leave there cars ar home or suffer a fine of $31. Amost 4,000 drivers were fined according to reuters. 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. Down 60 percent Congestion in the capital of France, after five days of intensifying smog. Dieasel fuel was blamed. They make up 67 percent of vehicles in France compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in Western Europe.
+
+The days without cars started in Bogota in the mid-1990s. President Obama's goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions unvieled last week. The United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily after. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to the countrys rate in January 1995. Americans can not afford new cars and the unemployed wern't going to work anyway. The next few years will be telling. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+af2d83addb04,809AD723F37C,"The ""Face on Mars"" was not created by aliens. NASA has literal proof of the Face. It may be on pictures, but the things they put in movies and magazines isn't real. They use that to get attention, but they didnt actually go into space and get the pictures. NASA took time to build those space technologies that are made to go into space and look for things like that. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+54621de50891,809AD723F37C,"Hollywood movies and fiction magazines aren't true about the ""Face on Mars."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+33664e15f6ae,809AD723F37C,"They say the ""Face on Mars"" was made by natural land forming. That is true ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0db1334234d8,809AD723F37C,"On Earth we have rocks formed naturally, or fossils were made using the imprint of dead animals and plants, but still formed naturally over time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee9369b3cf91,809AD723F37C,"Do not believe what movies and sometimes even the internet says. Who you should really believe is the people who actually saw the ""Face on Mars"" with the technology they have built to study it. You should listen to the team of scientist who know all about space and the planets. They study the galaxy inside and out and know way more about the ""Face on Mars"" and the planets then the movies and magazines do. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+259d8c591fb3,80FE1A70F85C,"People go to school not only because they have to, but because a school's job is to advance students knowledge to set up kids and teens for their future goals. A teacher's job in the workplace is to give students knowledge on things they must know and help them with their next step in life. Their next step could be; college, applying for a job, help writing a resume, applying for a college, looking for a major, etc. After a long 9 months of school, some schools require students to complete a summer project to assure learning over the break. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+48c5208c89d2,80FE1A70F85C,"If students are required to complete a summer project, it must be student-designed ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d28c83616171,80FE1A70F85C,"it introduces themselves, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fa5c96f10de6,80FE1A70F85C,"helps students discover their interest, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e34216592631,80FE1A70F85C,develops creativity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7fa02c2bdf9e,80FE1A70F85C,Summer projects should be student-designed to introduce themselves to their teachers the following school year ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7ef989a9d027,80FE1A70F85C,"Martin Luther King Jr. created a "" I had a dream...""
+
+speech that explained his struggle with racism and segregation. M.L.K. Jr. wrote and executed the speech in front of a live audience on his own, later making him the leader of the civil rights movement. The speech gave him a name worldwide, everyone knew ""Martin Luther King Jr.""
+
+During the holocaust time period, a young Jew, Ann Frank kept a diary for people of the future so they knew what happened to all the Jews who were killed by the Germans. Her diary is now a famous book and in the Holocaust Museum in D.C. Ann Frank's diary was written herself, before that she was just one of many Jews, but because of her words, everyone know's who she is. A student-designed project would set up a teacher idea for how much their students know and help them to learn about their students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de56bc247355,80FE1A70F85C,Students developing a project on their own develops creativity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e3468d7fe21b,80FE1A70F85C,"Albert Einstein is known as one of the smartest people in the world. He created a robot, Frankenstein. Einstein blocked out others, used his own knowledge, got creative, and made history on his own. Helen Keller was born with the default of not being able to hear or to see. This was a tragedy, making it hard for Keller to walk and successfully know where she was going. Growing up with this issue she became extremely smart and used her problem, got creative, and began helping others by tutoring people who are deaf and blind. If students created their own projects it would give them an opportunity to come up with something incredible using what they, causing them to be creative, and generate ideas ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50b77014ba61,80FE1A70F85C,"Students are in school receiving teacher-designed projects all year. On a students summer break, they should at least be able to create a project that interest them. Many young kids, between 3-7, try many different sports like; soccer, basketball, dance, gymnastics, baseball, cheer leading, flag football, etc. parents enroll their kids in different things so they can discover their interest young and stick to what does interest them to improve. Many high schools have electives to chose from as an extra class for students to find their interest. If teachers picked the elective classes for the students there is a good chance the student would not enjoy the class, destroying the point of an elective. By letting students branch out and selecting things that they enjoy could create an amazing project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c82f6a01cf64,80FE1A70F85C,"Students wait all year for their three month summer break. Most schools dont require a summer project, however, some schools do. Over break there should be no project but if required give students the opportunity to design their own. This could not only benefit the students, but the teachers as well. A student-designed project would introduce students to their teachers, giving the teachers an idea of what the student does and does not know. It would cause students to brainstorm and come up with creative projects and help student's to find what interest them. A student-designed summer project would be effective for students as well as teachers.                                        ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+128116685be9,8105CDA99A3C,Nobody know how the face got on mars because we never been their. This face could of been their from the jump and ya'll said it was a human face i never seen a face of a human shaped like that a day in my life. You see how the earth changed dont you think ohther plantes form in other shapes like i said people we have no evidence that an alien shaped this face on mars. How we know NASA didnt do this? they can do every thing eles like having a little car drive around on mars and see whats all their and bring littel rocks back from mras. People we got to understand that they is just trying to get our MONEY out of us why you think strang things come out of no were and then they put it on the web. Thats why they make us think stuff is out their like this how you know they didnt just make something that can carve this face on mars an now they trying to say it was aliens that did this. You got to think outside the box people dont let these people trick you for your money because the more attention you give them the more money you give them so please people open your eyes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e0bb6cc275de,811B878CE2C1,They should do the program because in the program you will learn how to be a cowboy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+385b614f56d1,811B878CE2C1,Also you will learn how to travel the seas and survive in cold wheather ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d2743b948d5,811B878CE2C1,being in the program could be fun because you will learn how to be a cowboy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9b7195c6185,811B878CE2C1,Luke wants to be a segoing cowboy because he likes to travel the seas and he also likes to be a cowboy. Another reason is because he wants to have fun as a cowboy and he really wants to go travel the seas. He wants to have fun because he never has fun at his house so that is why he wants to have some fun. His house is probably boring so that is also why he wants to go outside and have some fun at the program because he wants to get out of his house and have fun. He wants to go outside and do the program so he can be a cowboy and have fun. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e41301fce765,811B878CE2C1,To train to be a cowboy you have go through obstacles and overcome your fears so you can travel the seas. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57fbdb96a4bf,811B878CE2C1,You also want to be able to ride the waves so you be brave and save people from your enemies ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61ac695a18b5,811B878CE2C1,You also defenitely need to be strong so you can overcome your fears and fight bad guys ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65464201ebee,811B878CE2C1,so you can take them down so that is why you need to be strong. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+218300a3c735,811B878CE2C1,You also need to be brave so if you get put in a bad situation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f5a1b341103,811B878CE2C1,you will know how to get out of the bad situation so you won't get hurt while you are in the bad situation so that is why need to learn how to get out of a bad situation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bffd6a7d90e2,811B878CE2C1,You also need to learn how to stay calm in a bad situation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca3d4630d274,811B878CE2C1,if you do not stay calm then you will get hurt so that is why you need to learn how to stay calm in a bad situation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7959ada8c04,811B878CE2C1,You need to watch out for the terrible situations in the terrible situations then you will get hurt ,Claim,Effective,,,
+055c60ad0bf5,811B878CE2C1,. In the bad situations you usually will not get hurt or injured. So if you are a cowboy you need to watch out for the bad situations and the terrible situations because you will get hurt. So that is why you have to watch out for the bad situations and the terrible situations. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bfb9bf246e8,811B878CE2C1,you have to at least tryout for the seagoing cowboys program because you never know what could happen at the program. You could have fun or you could get hurt or injured. So you have to watch out for that so you do not get hurt or injured. If you want to be a cowboy you have guns to protect yourself and when enemies try to shoot you then you can shoot them instead. So you might not get hurt if you carry guns on you for protection. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6df20a227c5f,81587E82D64B,"i disgress using value of technology to read students emotional expresstion ,in the modern the technology its very prosperity,the social devemplmant well, we can invent something using we life to be the convenience, its also confine the someing. like the article. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2ff73f2173a4,81587E82D64B,"and i think the facial actial action coding system maybe good maybe bad. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+78b5e6b1d1b0,81587E82D64B,"from the ""makig mona lisa smile"" we can read to 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry, that it is we want,i think it is very precise,maybe we can find than more expressions but l think taht not we want ,the famous drawed it syomby the history, i think the author drawing this he never this can have so many emotion, further say the emotional expression to value for person the emotional it is not very good , we dont prohibition this technology just for the student its is not very.
+
+i read to the paragraph 6, i read to the dr. huang say a"" classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored""that good we can using the technology to the good way ,is not demolition the classic,we can using to home pc to convenience,like we can down some simple insttructions that""encode""different emotions,fact its a good idea,they difference between a genuine smile and a forced one,lift the corners of your mouth.
+
+for the 9 say ""we unconsciously imitate another person facil expressions. i greass it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ec09b028304c,81587E82D64B,so i this system have benfitie and bay way just lets we hao to use it ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5c962de3511f,81A4938D3986,Making mona lisa smile agian was the main topic detail in the story. For one reason it would have to be when they painted a picture of her for acomplishing the process of the model of a great model she smiled for that picture. So that is why that gave her own picture of herself and the computer model picture is a little bit better than the orignal one. The computer model has better details in the picture and it also tightens her lips for the picture. More reason is that they express the emotion of her picture in paragraph 2. In paragraph 7 the experts for the picture tell Mona Lisa how to pose for the picture in the first sentence. Paragraph 8 explains Mona being truthful and smiling in the last sentence. Inside Paragraph 4 it is telling about how the expression of the real face is inside the art of Mona Lisa. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3e95fdb2ea7,81BC51842FBB,"This face has been the talk of NASA and the talk of headlines for quite sometime. The topic has been argued many times and there are many different opinions on whether or not its a face or a natural landform. What do you think? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+eb73846571a0,81BC51842FBB,"The discussions of this being a face are all over the place, poeple believe that ailens have caused this ""face"" on Mars surface. There are three different pictures, one from 1976, one from 1998, and one from 2001. In the first pictuere you see a outline of a face and a mouth, but back in the 70's the quality of technology wasn't very advanced. In the first photo, due to poor quality, it is just a land mass that has trhe outline of a face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28c6e741badb,81BC51842FBB,"There is no form of life on Mars, otherwise, NASA would have detected in years ago. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f54b44714185,81BC51842FBB,"In the article it says that the camera that was used to capture the 1976 photo only had 43 meters per pixel, in other words meaning that there's almost no way in telling what the first picture was or resembled. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5dadfa067f6,81BC51842FBB,"In 1998 and 2001, you can see the picture more clearly due to the advancement in technology you clean clearly see that there is no outline or resembalance of a face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14eacb142f7a,81BC51842FBB,"The Face is nothing but a landmass, the scientific name: A mesa. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f71d168dad7f,81BC51842FBB,In the '98 photo the picture is foggy and unclear because it was winter on Mars and they had to take a photo through a cloud. When the photographs began to be released online there was many observations but many realized it was infacr not a face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+021a650e3a75,81BC51842FBB,"After all the questions blew over, Directors began putting images and shots into movies which again started raising talk. In movies or films there are special effects people that are able to enchance photos and clips. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b03e0a08b60,81BC51842FBB,"So most of the photographs and clips are not actually NASA recorded and theres a good chance most of them had been edited to make more money on a film or movie because people want to know more about myterious things like this. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb40784931b2,81BC51842FBB,"Concluding with what i said at the beginning, the pictures we see are nothing more than a mesa. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e8f0890042f3,81BC51842FBB,"Science it to greatly advanced now and if there was any form of life on any other planets NASA would atleast have an idea of it. I don't believe this is an alien artifact, because Mars cannot support life.          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cf0f3d6f03b7,81EE0A1746B9,I agree with the article ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e9eb46302bda,81EE0A1746B9,"according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions' which mean they can tell how a picture is feeling"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+80ccdc9a6ae0,81EE0A1746B9,"I know, its weired lmao, but its also true ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c339f89eb764,81EE0A1746B9,"""The classroom computer could recognize when a student is being confused or bored"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0801b3dce18,81EE0A1746B9,the class got a new update to tell how people are feeling ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+db314500d5d7,81EE0A1746B9,"I thiink everybody and everyschool should get something like this it's a really cool thing, 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8860cb1a0b03,81EE0A1746B9,You would really know how people really feel if we got something like this ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe80adfd10a0,81EE0A1746B9,"Good way to boost up techology as well, I'll say."" Shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry, no thats not your science teacher, grading your latst lab, it is the Mona Lisa "" so you're saying a computer fugured that out? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4c6d2c34de0,81EE0A1746B9,if a compute can do all that then ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+21b6d5934ee8,81F537995AC6,In this essay I will be talking about if people should be able to be on their cellular device while they drive or should they not be able to? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6e9fbc169739,81F537995AC6,In my opinion I don't think we should be able to ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4e9da1b89956,81F537995AC6,because there are many dumb drivers without phones in their hands and the good drivers turn worse with one in their hands. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23a914b5f71d,81F537995AC6,More car crashes will happen and more deaths will come with it. I just don't think putting another distraction in drivers hands would be the best option for the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a382ce5b253b,81F537995AC6,To start off this essay I believe having any type of electronic device while you are operating a vehicle is a distraction and can cause wrecks and deaths. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0a95d2d68a3d,81F537995AC6,No type of electronic device should be in the drivers hand only type that should be allowed is the phone holders that are legal that clip onto your A/C vents but shouldn't be texting on it only phone calls and the driver should always have both hands on the steering wheel as you drive. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+501f6b5a69ff,81F537995AC6,"To conclude my essay having a phone while driving is not necessary in any way. Just wait till you park somewhere or you get home to check it, because your life is more important than a text message. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cab684de6c2e,8212DA6D0656,"Did you know on Mars there is a face? Some people think it was created by aliens. Other people think it is just a natural landform on Mars. The face on Mars was first discovered in 1976.
+
+When they first saw it it looked like a ""shadowy likeness of a human face"". It was an enormous head nearly two miles away from end to end. When they first discovered it they saw it staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9ab75903cb76,8212DA6D0656,"I am going to be telling you why this is just a natural landform on Mars. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+ade27ecea53a,8212DA6D0656,"
+When scientist first saw it in 1976, they thought it was just another Martian mesa which is common around Cydonia ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+72f2212d249a,8212DA6D0656,"They knew is was some type of landform. A few days later, NASA unvieled the image for all to see. The caption was ""huge rock formation which resembles a human head"". The only reason they said it was aliens, was to get people's attention. That is exaclty what it did. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f5d03fd39cd,8212DA6D0656,"Eventually on April 5,1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over to Cydonia for the first time to check it out. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b7e933bff6d,8212DA6D0656,While they were there Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture that was ten times sharper than the original photos. When the image first apperared on a JPL web site it revealed it was just a natural landform and there was no alien monument after all ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ca1c3de7948,8212DA6D0656,Not everyone was convinced it was just a landform. Many people still thought it had something to do with aliens ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6f121502ade4,8212DA6D0656,"But, how could aliens have done it? No one knows. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c833ab38ab27,8212DA6D0656,"On April 8,2001 Mars Global Surveyor drew a close enough second look. ""We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the field of view,""Garvin stated. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size"", Garvin added. ""So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" he added. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e891572cbd64,8212DA6D0656,They could tell there was nothing just the land its self. It could not have been aliens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35ea4c6c67bb,8212DA6D0656,"What the pictures they actually took show is a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common in the American West. ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho"", Garvin says. Garvin ended his statement with,""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c43290606102,8212DA6D0656,"Coming to a conclusion, the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Even Garvin, the Mars Global Surveyor said it himself,""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivlent of a butte or mesa, landforms common around the American West"". The Face on Mars is really, just an natural landform.                 ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1118e91e8777,821972DE4E6C,Science could be where we can possibly find advances and great inventions for the future ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+055dc69fb8c5,821972DE4E6C,"Now in days a machines can tell you how exactly you feel!. We are humans, but technology could change how we think, how we act and high chances how we live ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d553a8ce4284,821972DE4E6C,"First of all, technology have changed how humans can be in the future like computers. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+265169a3a1e7,821972DE4E6C,"But technolgy can have a negative impact too. Proffesor Thomas Huan, invented A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can let humans know how they feel. They could even read your facial actiond
+
+""There are more experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to comunicate."" do you think science has gone too far? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebd3131e042b,821972DE4E6C,"Second, somethimes you can harshly tell when a friend its mad or happy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+14cc22281f20,821972DE4E6C,"How would you feel knowing that a computer knows every single emotion that you are feeling at the moment and the percentage for example 5% angry, 78% happy, 2% disgusted etc. The creator of this technology started with the basic emotions which are happiness,surprie, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. It would be creepy when you ""Imagine a computer taht knows if your happy or sad."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b43abbea65b6,821972DE4E6C,"Third, humans make calculations and guess the emotions of others ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f13ecfb96d1e,821972DE4E6C,"For instance, you can infer how a friend feels or just by looking at their face but you can't tell an accurate number of emotions like the computers.""A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or boring."" with the big advances of technology we might not act like humans in the future. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc19104e9430,821972DE4E6C,"In conclusion, Science play an importent roll in technology and technology have created machines that can tell your emotions. We are humans and by the advance of technology, future then might change the way we act, think and possibly live our lives.               ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5c117f335d71,821EFD80EE4D,"People from the NASA think that aliens built the face on Mars, but actually it is a natural landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+15c8a093e7df,821EFD80EE4D,"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it llook like an Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+398eef829bbb,821EFD80EE4D,"A few days later NASA unveiled tthe image for all to see. The caption noted a ""huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4327af53275a,821EFD80EE4D,""" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. The ""Face on Mars"" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store chechout lines for 25 years! But not everyone was satisfied.
+
+The Face on Mars is located as 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98, a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. Mission controllers prepared to look again. ""It's not easy to target Cydonia,"" says Garvin. ""In fac, it's hard work.
+
+"" Mars Global Surveyor is mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. ""We just don't pass over the Face very often,"" he noted.
+
+What the picture actually shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common aroud the America West. ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River PLain of Idaho,"" says Garvin.
+
+""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same heigh as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bfebf7cd66dd,82223F37DDCC,"In this passage ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"", the author made very detailed and valid points about the use of technology detecting what our expressions say about our moods, but, technology reading students facial expressions is over the top. I belive that this new technology would force students to always want to force a smile so that the computer doesn't fully recognize their real from their fake. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c99188277856,82223F37DDCC,I think that this new technology is bad for anyone to even have. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00b105396821,82223F37DDCC,"First, I would like to say that this is a really good topic the author brings forth to the table, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+11cea288d2cc,82223F37DDCC,but who would want to feel like their being watched? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e56ad2fb135f,82223F37DDCC,"""For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different."" This information is truly invalid. Smiling at an ad does not make it appear the next time you get on a different website, and frowning at an ad doesn't change it either. It's the way the ads are set up that it makes them leave or come back. Student's shouldn't have to feel like they have to fake their emotions just so that the computer doesn't recognize how they feel in reality. I do not believe in this ""new technology"" that seems to be changing the way we see ourselves. I would not want kids to feel like they are being watched or even judged on by what they look like through a computer screen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+301b4aaa622c,82223F37DDCC,"Lastly, I would like to say that this point of view that the author is taking is a very good start, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a0513e3aa82e,82223F37DDCC,but thinking about the author feels versus the way every one else would feel puts this topic on hold. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+54abbb1bd9b3,82223F37DDCC,Not every one wants their child to be watched through a computer screen that's looking at their faces to show how they feel. If some one is happy on the inside but frowing on the outside then how would the computer sense that? Sometimes we hide our emotions on the indside and show neutral expressions to everyone else outside of our hearts and mind. Computers can only detect what they see and not what is actually going on. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b60f52a8e6b,82223F37DDCC,That is why I believe that the value of using technology to read students' emotional expressions should be forgotten. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2b1be576a726,82514A286403,The face is a landform because the planet must of formed it a long time ago. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+29b24e5d6b7f,82514A286403,Or some where there was life on that planet and they died right there where the surface rose up andnformed its face ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+039104c0f619,82514A286403,"Most people think it was created by aliens but it was clarified as a natural landform. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+70be161858ed,82514A286403,"We took picture ten times more sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site,revealing a natural landform. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a08955d08d6c,82514A286403,When they unveiled the image for all to see the caption noted a huge rock formation thee author thought it was a good way to attract attention to mars it certainly did. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a3b7ae6c5b00,82514A286403,But before they could see the face they had to go thorght wispy clouds and they had to wait for winter to be over. But after all that on a cloudless summer day they finally got to see the face. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1db4f53659f0,827472D8F8A9,"There are always peple saying that aliens are alive and maybe that there is going to be an alien invasion. In 1976, a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) found an image of a peron or as MGS says a ""a Viking photo."" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7e6c88c102fa,827472D8F8A9,I believe the image of the Viking is just a landform and it wasn't created by aliens. I will explain to you why i think it's a landform. ,Position,Effective,,,
+9c78e6e39be8,827472D8F8A9,I believe the image is a just a landform because scientists haven't discovered life yet on mars even though they have found water on Mars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+49fb395104ea,827472D8F8A9,"""Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+78721c5167b6,827472D8F8A9,"common enough around Cydnia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah."" I agree with this statement because if the Martian mesa was made again, that means that they will be around for a long time and it will never disappear. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf977b1ceed5,827472D8F8A9,The author also states that people think the image or the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+74c389eb92db,827472D8F8A9,"By the looks of the images, I could see that every year they have taken it, I can see that it's disappearing. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5c068ff1bc18,827472D8F8A9,"In the introduction, it says, ""New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is is: A mesa. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a09f7f1b1860,827472D8F8A9,"If people want evidence of aliens or other creatures, they will have to do research on their spare time because scientists have a job to do and they will only do what they are ordered to do ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1549d0951b19,827472D8F8A9,"Just to be clear, when they took the photos of the Face on 1976,1998, and 2001, the technology wasn't as advanced as it is today but, if we take a photo of it today, I believe there will probably be another one of the landfoms ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+857b85c332e8,827472D8F8A9,"or probably we might see the Face but just slowly disappearing. These were some of my reasons to argue with to support my belief of the Face being a natural landform. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fea16dff3a4,827472D8F8A9,"In conclusion, the image of the Face was just a myth and I will never say it was created by aliens. Aliens aren't even real, that hasn't benn confirmed or said. Not one scientist has said that they have seen a living creature on any planet walking or doing anything. These were just rumors and it can be said as a myth if people want. Based on these reasons, I believe the Face is just a natural landform on Mars.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+01ebc495b451,82B175592A9D,"I think the new Facial Action Coding could be true, because nowadays we have more technology. The 3-D computer model of the face could actually see our face expressions. Maybe it wont actually know what we feel inside like our mood. The Facial Action Coding update can just tell us if we have a annoyed,sad,mad etc face. Sometimes, people seem sad or mad but that's just their thinking or worried face. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+36b87824ac17,82B175592A9D,"If the technology of the Facial Action Coding System was that powerful ir smart to read students emotions, it would be good and cool. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+45f156cd1988,82B175592A9D,Teachers would actually know why there student is quiet or why they're not doing anything in class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+188ef63323df,82B175592A9D,"My evidence is that "" by weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci"" masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotions). if you're really close with a friend or family member you'll know if their upset or not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a8029a0e4d37,82B175592A9D,You see them everyday you already know how they are ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6760c4c65448,82B175592A9D,"The Facial Action Coding System would just study your face and tell you how you are. Whoever came up with that software and the emotional expressions came out wrong. Then, people wouldn't trust it anymore. When you smile and your cheek bones raise then that a real smile and a showing all your teeth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cdd3d9da8c64,82B175592A9D,"Sometimes, when someone is really upset or don't want to be rude they can fake a smile that looks so realist. The software update also could follow is the student is bored or not knowing what to do. We honestly need that in all school. Some kids are always disrespectful or always getting in trouble, never doing work ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b34269190b22,82B175592A9D,The Facial Action Coding System would be so much help for everyone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+48ceafab0b85,82B175592A9D,The software update knew about the painting Monsa Lisa face expressions. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4994df65a29f,82B39D03262F,Venus will be a great planet to live on. Imagine if you could have a house on earth and one on Venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5eaa562838ec,82B39D03262F,There are alot of bad things about Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44b6bd725239,82B39D03262F,Also there is alot of good things about it to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2204f2a908df,82B39D03262F,Some of those not so good facts from the passage will be no space craft survies the landing on venus for more than a few hours. It has a thickness atmosphere of almost a 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Verus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+018b3c5b78c2,82B39D03262F,Some more not so good facts about venus will be some of the clouds have highly corrosire sulfurie acid. Also on that planet surface temp is over 800 degrees ferhight. Then the atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experrence on our own planet. This may scare you away but dont let it do that. People is coming out with new things everday. It just takes time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a7c0f420389,82B39D03262F,"Venus was probably coverd with large oceans and could have supported varrious forms of life just like earth. Venus still has some features that are similer to earth. Temperatures would still be very warm at 170 degrees fahrenneit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Radiation would not exceed Earth levels but survivable for humans. Old techtology called mechanical computers were first envisoned in the 1800 and played in 1940s during world war 2. It make calculations by using gears and levers and dont require electronic at all. Which on venus it will be some time intell electronic will be there ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6301b8234003,82B39D03262F,"All in all, give it some time do some research study and some day we will be on venus. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f130909cb219,82BB2259D709,"Do you wanna take care of horses,young cows,and mules? Well if you do,Join the Seagoing Cowboys in taking our adventure ot help people anad places bombed in World War ll. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+aed4f4f93fd2,82BB2259D709,"When Luke and Don were traveling over seas in the Seagoing Cowboys,They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, Headed for Greece. The cargo was 335 horses and enough oats to feed all the horses.
+
+Before arrivingt in Greece,Luke turned 18, Which back then meant that Luke could be drafted for military service.
+
+A couple years later he was discharged,Luke had made nine trips,The most of any Seagoing Cowboy ever. The cattle boat trips were an unbelieveable experience for Luke being a small town boy. Before helping anyone he had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. But Luke also got to see the Acropolis in Greece and taking a gondola ride in Venice,Itlay.
+
+Luke also toured at the evacuated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern United States and a month to China.
+
+Caring for the animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They had to eat and give the animals water three times a day. Bales of hay and oats had to be pulled from the lower ship. The stalls had to be cleaned. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dde199748487,82BC11EA5744,"According to the article venus is dangerous, But scientist dont care. they are fascinated by Venus because it may once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. Scientist has been sending spacecrafts on Venus but no spacecraft has survived the landing ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b24239a298eb,82BC11EA5744,Thats one of the many reasons why Venus is dangerous to mankind ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5f5793a55efa,82BC11EA5744,"The clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."" doesn't that sound cool? Yea it surely does but that is dangerous to mankind, Who would want to breath in acid? Venus has harmful sections that Astronomers are going to try and over come, they are going to expand their limits and try to learn more about whats in the atmosphere. According to the passage scientist has been testing a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surfce. It have lasted for 3 weeks in such a condition according to the passage. There has been many more projects ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec8b6830a5bc,82BC11EA5744,"Astronomers are not going to give up. there going to try and fight/fix the differences and let nothing get in there way. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+31b5d3fa8d05,82BC11EA5744,"Astronomers curiosty is whats going to help us learn about things and planets besides earth. Woudn't you want to learn more about our world even though theres going to be a little difficutly during the way? Maybe one day scientist can overcome these small problems and learn more about the Atmosphere. I think Astronomers are going to take on that challenge. Remember anythings possible if you put your mind to it, and thats what Astronomers are doing. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a40aadd41670,82F91FFC49DE,Drivers shouldn't be able to use devices while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1801e0799c01,82F91FFC49DE,It causes them to lose concentration. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bf8c82417a3,82F91FFC49DE,"If they lose concentration they could end up running a red light, not stopping at a stop sign, or even a wreck. They could also run off the run or into something. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdcd60129b4b,82F91FFC49DE,If they were to use a phone it's if they are at a complete start and not driving. If they get a call just put it on speaker or tell them to hold while you driving. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d2a0160dcac,82F91FFC49DE,They should text while driving either its more dangerous than being on the phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f24b8498744,82F91FFC49DE,If they text while driving their eyes will be completely off the road and they won't know who's in front of them. Texting and driving is what most people get arrested for. People should get all their texting and calls out the way before driving in traffic. Texting and driving can cause an accident quicker than being on the phone.   ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e5465383aa4,839FDA058989,"Have you ever seen a landmark that looks like something else? In 1976 a Mars roover named Viking 1 spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. This just hapened to be huge rocks together looking like a face. NASA named this the ""Face on Mars."" The ""Face on Mars"" has become a pop icon. It has appeared in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+62c68ccbc883,839FDA058989,"The Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d7edb7c894c,839FDA058989,its on Mars which could be an alien ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+efb73db320d0,839FDA058989,many roovers have seen the Face when they go to Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+646c3d031e62,839FDA058989,The Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+05ae1c66000f,839FDA058989,How can we not know that it is not an alien. NASA people can't go up to Mars to look at it face-to-face. Roovers can only take pictures of it. Mars is too far away that NASA can't send people up there to make sure it is an alien. There isn't any oxygen up there so people could breathe. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4657431fa56,839FDA058989,"The Face is on Mars, which could be an alien. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e4559e2d844a,839FDA058989,"People have always thought that there were aliens on Mars. This time there actually could be one on Mars. Life on Mars could be a real thing. Mars is a eird place because it is red, unlike Earth which is mostly blue and green. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+416df8ad3c59,839FDA058989,The Face is a natural landform because NASA has proven that there can't be any life form on Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd23773fa844,839FDA058989,"There is nothing that they would be able to eat to stay alive. The planet is red and there isn't any water or anything to drink for them to survive. There is no possible way for any life form to survive on Mars. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e12879d7786,839FDA058989,There is a natural landform on Mars that looks like a face because huge rocks were fromed together looking like a face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3fbf275af76,839FDA058989,"This is all nature, there is no way that aliens could live on this planet. Natural landforms all around the universe. Mountains and hills are all over Earth. Nature takes control of everything that is alive. The Face is a natural landform and not some kind of alien. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35db27a1e21d,839FDA058989,"The""Face on Mars"" is a natural landform because aliens can't live on a planet without anything to survive, natural ladforms are all over the universe, and the Face is just huge rocks formed together looking like a face. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+59d43c4afe31,839FDA058989,"I strongly believe that this is not an alien, and that this is a natural landform.                              ",Position,Adequate,,,
+46ccf60017dd,83FB519F21F2,"Luke bomberger was just a normal high school graduate, Until his friend Don Reist asked him to go with him to Europe on a cattle boat. He was just given the opportunity of a lifetime. Luke and his friend Don had reasons to sign up for being a "" Seagoing cowboy"". World war II had now ended and many countries were left destroyed, to help the countries recover from war they will need things such as food, animals, and many other things. To help the people in those countries 44 nations united to form a group called UNRRA ( the united nations relief and rehabilitation administration). The "" Seagoing Cowboys"" were hired to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. In August 1945, they got orders to report to New Orleans. Luke and his friend arrived on August 14th, the same day the Pacific war ended. There was 335 horses to take care of. Before arriving in Greece Luke turned 18, which means that he is now eligable to be drafted for the military service. In 1947 Luke had made nine trips, more than any seagoing cowboy. Luke ended up touring many places around the world. Luke was doing his job chcking on the animals, but this time was different it was raining, Luke accidentally slid down a ladder and almost fell into the deep dark ocean but a piece of metal stopped him fromm falling. Luke was lucky to be alive but he still was injured with some cracked ribs. Although it wasn't always fun, Luke found things to do like baseball, volleyball, tennis, and many more things ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49e39d85c6af,83FB519F21F2,"Luke had an amazing adventure being a Seagoing Cowboy, he discovered the world and was given a once in a lifetime opportunity. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+2afaf467c1d2,84305C417C4B,Extracurricular activities should be mandatory because kids could look forward to activities after school instead of going home and sitting around for hours.  ,Position,Effective,,,
+3f3996c1cd0a,84305C417C4B,"It would help kids stay out of trouble, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f429111abbbb,84305C417C4B,"keep students active, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f113c667b980,84305C417C4B,help students build a social life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+689ebb17f418,84305C417C4B,"Most students parents have and office job. The average work time is from 9am to 5pm, and school gets out at around 2pm- 4pm, so most kids are left unsupervised for around 2-6 hours. Kids left alone can get into all sorts of trouble and can be persuaded to do things that they know they should not do. Kids can be convinced to do drugs, join gangs, and vandalize public property. Instead of doing these things they can be supervised at school doing something that is fun and enjoyable instead of being mischievous. The school environment would be much safer because students wouldnt be influenced be other people to do any bad things, so they would not be doing or selling drugs and they would not be in or associated with a gang. Therefore, students would not bring in bad things into our schools. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca8515e28b51,84305C417C4B,"Some kids go home and play sports outside or play a game with their siblings, but most kids go home and play video games for 5 hours till they have to eat dinner or go to bed. This is very unhealthy. An extracurricular activity would get a person who usually plays lots of video games to do something active. They could play sports after school and they would still have time for video games. Playing sports after school could convince them to play sports for fun, not because they have to do something after school and they could join a league and exercise more than just after school. This would help kids stay active and healthy. After school activities for all people is a good idea because it would help kids stay active and healthy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+943d65352c21,84305C417C4B,"During the school day some kids do not socialize with others because they are tired, shy, or they are very focused on academics. After school, activities would really help kids gain a social life. After school activities are laid back and are made too do something active after school, not to secretly trick kids into too staying an extra hour after school. The activities after school are fun, they are meant to be. Kids after school who are shy can communicate with others because the activities give them ways to start of conversations and communicate with others. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7e8d3a422d8f,84305C417C4B,"Extracurricular activities should be mandatory. This would help kids stay out of trouble because it would keep them doing something healthy instead of something mischievous. It would students kids stay healthy because it would force them to do something active. and finally, it would help students because it would help students gain a social life because they could communicate with others.                                                 ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c78bac663deb,8439B0D3B7DC,techonology called the ficial Action coding System enavles computer to identify human emotions is really good thing. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+95113d399630,8439B0D3B7DC,we would like to know If they are lying about their emotional. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b771e38c2794,8439B0D3B7DC,Dr. Huang is really smart but I think he is right. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a73304618b2b,8439B0D3B7DC,"First,computer to identify human emotions is really good thing because we would know If they are lying to us or no. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34fac375037c,8439B0D3B7DC,"Acoording the text "" can we actually ""calculate""emotions like math homework"",I think they got the right point because our emotional is like calculate. They have to calculate are we really sad or happy. Another example from the text"" The Mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do"". I Hope our school should do like that so people we could help other people whenever we are sad. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79168ca72394,8439B0D3B7DC,"Second,these day a lot of people they are lying to another people to much. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7587db4c465a,8439B0D3B7DC,"Honestly, I used to cheat on my girlfriend too back in the day but the good part is that we don't know facial action yet. If we both know that time I bet she will say"" let do this because I want If you are cheating on me"". Still right now she don't know that I cheat on her but we are already broke tho. I saw on social media a lot Boyfriend and girlfriend did that. When they know they both got cheating,both of them feel wierd. People is really good at hide thing I hope we are did Facial Action so we could know how is lying or nah. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6dd172a5010f,8439B0D3B7DC,"Finally,I think Dr huang is really smart doing those kind of thing."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e950f67dbedd,8439B0D3B7DC,"The software is the latest innovation from prof,Thomas Huang if the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University OF
+
+lllinois.""Some day I want be like him,He is my idol from now. Also If someone ask me who would I want to meet right now,I would say"" I want to meet with Dr. Huang"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c39dfe6f6f93,8439B0D3B7DC,"Conclusion,every year different technology is coming out,I can't Imagine what is going be like in 20 year later. What kind of technology would be going out. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8835735387f1,84CA98DC9D16,"Ford, Volkswagen, Kia, and Chevy's... while these car brands may have been a massive part of the American culture, its significance in our lives may be declining.  According to recent studies and stories from around the world, car transportation popularity is decreasing dramatically. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ca07279bcb02,84CA98DC9D16,Some advantages of limiting car usage that the United States will benifit from include ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d9bccee85fc,84CA98DC9D16,"reducing greenhouse gases emitted making for a better environment, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffb27da5b29c,84CA98DC9D16,"less usage of cars can lower stress and is safer. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3e77978662e0,84CA98DC9D16,"By limiting the amount that the citizens of the United States operate their vehicles, the condition of our environment's atmosphere will improve.  As stated in Source 1, ""and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.""  This passage is referring to the amount of greenhouse gas emitted here in America because of passenger cars.  By not using car and taking advantage of other methods of transportation such as buses, walking, and riding a bike that number can be reduced significantly.  In the United States we are also learning from mistakes made by other countries and cities.  ""After days of near-record pollution,"" Source 2 says, ""Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.""  A lesson can be taken from Paris of how we do not want to end up in a situation like that.  By limiting our driving currently we can avoid having to take major steps to clean and clear our environment.  ""It will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants,"" a sociologist predicts in Source 4. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+71d5a4f09890,84CA98DC9D16,"A decent amount of stress comes with owning and operating a motorized vehicle.  You are constantly worrying about if you will be late, or if you have enough gas to make it from point A to point B.  Children are another concern and trying to keep them safe around roads and driving by themselves.  Limiting the use of cars can create a less stressful, and safer society.  In Source 3 it explains that, ""Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.""  Lowering the use of cars can make life a little less busy because it is one thing less that you have to worry about throughout your day.  Heidrun Walter said, in Source 1, ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.""  ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+36866d95f8f5,84CA98DC9D16,"Although the use of cars may be convienent, the benifits of limiting the usage may be beginning to outweight the inconviences. Between reducing the greenhouse gas creating a cleaner environment as well as lessening stress and making the roads safer, the advantages of limiting car usage in the United States are major.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+faf3891ae858,84DA3A4E84CC,"Summer is the time of the year every student looks forward to. Apart from socializing with friends, enjoying the fresh air, and participating in outdoor activities, students have the chance to assure their learning abilities through summer projects. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+fdd628562102,84DA3A4E84CC,"Summer projects should be school-designed because it allows flexibility, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8904d2de6e0e,84DA3A4E84CC,it develops leadership skills ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a5f41d9e0f0b,84DA3A4E84CC,it increases creativity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cd80203578d5,84DA3A4E84CC,Student-designed projects allows flexibility during summer break. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3e8986e2a92e,84DA3A4E84CC,"Generic_City's lifeguard program was very successful during the summer due to lifeguard availability. Being a lifeguard is a common job students pursue during the summer. Not only does it allow students to gain profit at a young age, but it also requires a high level of maturity and responsibility. Because it requires specific training and dedication, students must have the time to complete every task that is given. Having a student-designed summer project allows students to set their own study time instead of following a specific schedule that could intervene with working hours.
+
+In 2019, the Pied-Piper Theater Association successfully rehearsed their summer musical: West Side Story The Musical, due to the availability and hard work of all actors. In West Side Story, the combination of performing arts and music are combined as one to produce an extraordinary musical. Rehearsing a musical is no simple task: lines must be memorized, choreography and blocking must be pristine, and every actor must be present on opening show days. A student-designed project over the summer can help students complete their required work in an flexible manner while still completing personal activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4a7859e3d57,84DA3A4E84CC,Developing leadership skills for the future are offered through student-designed projects. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4af1e9829c7d,84DA3A4E84CC,"Designing their own promotional plans, students from the Technology Student Association were able to pursue college business majors. The Technology Student Association allowed students to be completely in charge of their own work to get a sense of the leadership that is needed in many technology and business fields today. As a result, the ones who were consistent in their work and created their own designs were the most successful at the TSA regional competitions. Student-designed projects allows students to be in control and have the opportunity to manage work responsibly. Even though having a teacher-designed project can help in follow instructions and meeting deadlines, being ones own boss opens doors to many leadership opportunities to excel in the work field, and in ones personal life.
+
+Panera Bread employees that have shown leadership development have moved to higher job positions. In the food industry, like most jobs, employees must start off with a lower position and must enhance their abilities in order to move up to a higher position. For example, in Panera Bread, most new employees start of working as a cashier, dining room attendant, or produce worker; these minor positions prepare the employee with basic skills and prepare them for future duties. Later, when more experience is gained, employees move up to trainer or manager assistant. Similarly, student-designed projects help students learn to be self-sufficient and lead one another to success. As a result, future generations are encouraged to do the same. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1bb341afb96f,84DA3A4E84CC,Student-designed projects allow students to show their full potential through creativity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+087a9fc25db5,84DA3A4E84CC,"Generic_School economics and finance teacher, allowed students to create their own budget plan presentation, discarding the teacher rubric that was given, to show their creativity. A typical power point presentation a high school teacher assigns has basic requirements: a specific number of slides, easily-applicable pictures, and bullet point information. However, when given the chance, students embraced their creativity outside the classroom environment and created sideshows, music videos, and drawings that still portrayed the same important idea any basic power point would for the assignment. As a result, the students who got lower scores on previous power points, increased their grade tremendously. Unlike teacher-designed projects, Student-designed projects has many varieties a student can choose from; students don't have to limit their potential to strict instructions. Instead, they have numerous ways to complete any assignment feeling more confident and fulfilled.
+
+Generic_School International Talent Show showed how students from different cultures expressed their love and appreciation through creative attire. The purpose of International Night is to unite students together to celebrate their culture as one. For example, students from Peru dressed up with typical Peruvian dresses and hats and danced salsa, while students from France wore more formal attire and simply help their flag up proudly. Every student had a unique way of showing their performance to the crowd; the teachers had very little input on exactly how the students should perform and let their creativity run free. Even though a summer project doesn't exactly involve performing to a large crowd, students have the chance to show their creative ideas and opinions without any limitations. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf2972d1b02a,84DA3A4E84CC,students have a unique way of showing their academic and social potential to the world ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+52a67c961fe6,84DA3A4E84CC,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+06a156669a0e,84DB11599420,"The sun is shining, there is a slight breeze in the air, and no one is wearing pants that go past their knees. These are all signs that summer break has officially started. Summer break is the time that all students look forward to, as it means that there aren't any more tests to take and homework to complete. It's a time when students can finally have the opportunity to have fun with family and friends without having to worry about academic stress. However, there are some schools that require students to complete summer projects in order for learning to continue during their break. With this, the question that arises is whether schools should make the teacher design the projects or allow for the projects to be student-designed. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+683c0a92bc9c,84DB11599420,These summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0c35a409202a,84DB11599420,"it gives students the opportunity to develop research skills, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+33ddf8859ff2,84DB11599420,"choose topics that they find interesting, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+62dc722cab96,84DB11599420,result in an increase in positive mental health. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+80ce1bd57ee7,84DB11599420,"Suppose a teacher assigns a project with specific guidelines and one topic to develop a solution to. This may make the expectations for the student clear-cut, but this type of project learning limits students in what they can explore. With the ability to design your own project, students learn how to research various topics before deciding on the one they will come up with a project to. Not only does this contribute to the development of enhanced research skills among students, but it prepares them for research in the future. In pursuing higher levels of education, it is crucial that students are knowledgeable on how to research about topics efficiently and accurately. Thus, those research skills are developed from student-designed projects and they benefit current and future educational advancement. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bd8f50bc865e,84DB11599420,"when I was in 6th grade I had a summer project of choosing an influential president and explaining what that president did for the country. At the time, I was interested in science instead of history. As a result, this project seemed lackluster and an arduous task to complete over my summer break. However, if I had been given the opportunity to choose a topic that interests me, I would have found the summer project exponentially more exciting and something to look forward to. Many students feel the same way about this, as they wish to choose the topic they will research and create a solution to. Therefore, it is evident that summer projects should be student-designed so that students can have a genuine interest in the project they are completing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a2e65b28fba9,84DB11599420,"Time and time again summer projects are dreaded by students and a task that many do not look forward to. As a result, students are left unhappy during summer break in regards to completing a project their teacher designed. This is either because the project has limitations, is about an uninteresting topic, or is difficult to complete. These factors can leave students feeling demoralized from completing their summer project and can make summer break a dreary time. Despite these conditions that come with teacher-designed projects, these problems can be solved with student-designed projects. When given the chance to explore what interests you and choosing whether any limitations exist regarding your project, inevitably students are inclined to complete summer projects. From the perspective of a student, you have more motivation to work on a self-designed project. This increased motivation correlates to an increase in mental health. When regarding this benefit, summer projects should be student-designed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d6eed373e2d,84DB11599420,"Summer is the time to relax and unwind from the stresses of the school year. It's a time of mornings spent sleeping in, afternoons laying out by the pool, and nights sleeping on the roof, counting the stars that gleam in the sky. That is why students look forward to summer break. As a result, schools should not contribute in reversing the association students make between summer break and enjoyment by assigning teacher-designed projects. With the intention of continual learning occurring over summer break, schools should allow projects to be student-designed. It gives students the chance to explore their passions and make new discoveries without any limitations. Teacher-designed projects only serve in holding students back from doing projects that truly hold meaning to them. Taking into consideration all of these factors, the most logical decision schools can make is having summer projects that are student-designed. This will allow students to have a good time in both the academic and non-academic part of their summer break.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+712c3b983bf5,84DC528FB9BC,I think that it would be useful in a classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c483070c0164,84DC528FB9BC,because sometimes the teacher cant always read the students facial expressions and will keep teaching the same boring class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94ff9011c767,84DC528FB9BC,"But if we used the new technology that could read the kids faces and change the course of the class to make it more interesting, then more kids wouldn't be bored all the time and they will be able to learn more about the subject that they are learing about. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bdaa7a7f104a,84DC528FB9BC,"The new technology could also save more money by not having to have alot of teachers in the classrooms and they could use for food, newer technology, and maybe a better building ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a029eb20314,84DC528FB9BC,"Also kids might not like some of the teachers that are in the classrooms and the teachers might not like the kids that are in their either, so with the new technolgy replacing a teacher would save them arguments with the kids and teachers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f064ba5a28ca,84DC528FB9BC,That is why i think that we should emplement this new technology into our school systems. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+767f920626ce,84DE135F319F,"Hey,how are you today. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6ee455e43688,84DE135F319F,it would be a great idea for you to participate in the Seagoing program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+15a8b430486e,84DE135F319F,if u enjoy caring fo animals then the Seagoing Cowboys program is the place for you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a1f275cc8a8,84DE135F319F,"the UNRRA hired''Seagoing Cowboys'' to take care of the horses,young cows,and mules that were shipped overseas. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79431c2aa247,84DE135F319F,the experience to visit many unique places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa5bcc8572aa,84DE135F319F,"if u like to travel and visit places you can have the side benefit of seeing Europe and China or even better you can see the special sight of the Acropolis in Greece. Also you can take a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,which is a city with streets of water. Another great thing about it is that you can tour a excavated castle in Crete and marvel at the Panama Canal on your way to China ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6208ce2aafbb,84DE135F319F,But if your lazy and non disaplined i dont think this is a good trip for you because you have to be prepared for hard work . ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ee2cf1d42086,84DE135F319F,if you like to have fun and enjoy yourself than this would be great for you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3053d0ac7a7,84DE135F319F,"you can find time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals have been unloaded. The cowboys play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped pass the time.      ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a640e1f41f2,84F4ACD3C467,"No, FACE is not created by aliens. as a person who works for nasa face is not created by aliens ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+1aa43ac547c9,84F4ACD3C467,i say this because Face is a naural landform found on mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ed43d0aa6c1,84F4ACD3C467,if you look at the pictures you can find that the imagae is getting clearer and clearer. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e78c42007044,84F4ACD3C467,"At first NASA
+
+thought it was just a martian mesa that made it look like a eygptian pharoah ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d520c113048d,84F4ACD3C467,"Afer a couple days had past we unveild the image wo the whole would could see the photo. When the image was seen by people the caption under image was "" It ewsembles a human head, with eyes, nose, and mouth.'' 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b73bbd05f6b,84F4ACD3C467,"Have you even seen an image that it looks like a person? Well, that's what we found on Mars. After a few years had past on April 5, 1998, Michael Mailen and his Mars Orbiter Camera got a picture ten times better from before. When the picture was uploaded a website it was revealing a natural land form and no alien monument after all ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c41bdd339ee4,84F4ACD3C467,"Since the image was uploaded not everyone was satisfied. Skeptics, still beleve that alien was hiddenby haze. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eb445eb1fb2b,84F4ACD3C467,To prove skepicts wrong MGS went for a second look. When they went they captured an extraordinary picture of ''Face'' for the second time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4cae9931f046,84F4ACD3C467,Finally I can say that ''Face on Mars'' was not created by aliens ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+eea5ebc2554b,84F4ACD3C467,The image actually shows that the Martian qquivalent of a buttle or mesa which a common around the America West.                                                                                       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e6e1a3043cfd,84FFEF07FB0D,"There are many questions about the mystery of the ""Face on Mars."" The article states that the picture of the Face is "" the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West."" More information about the ""Face on Mars"" is in the following statements. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+21eb1a9a671c,84FFEF07FB0D,It has been scientifically proven that the Face is nothing more than a rocky landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8604151f1908,84FFEF07FB0D,"Although it may seem to be formed my aliens, the Face truly is just a natural rock formation. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cfb74892d3c,84FFEF07FB0D,There is no actual evidence of life on other planets. Why assume that just by a mesa? The Face is made up of shadows. You too can probably make shadows that look like something it is not. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ed943aec1d5,84FFEF07FB0D,NASA has taken photos at different pixel sizes. Not everyone agrees with NASA's statement because they truly believe that NASA is hiding information from them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0a176dae71e,84FFEF07FB0D,"Talk about the Face began after some people decided that it would be a ""good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars."" Afterwards, many conversations and arguements were about the Face. It became a pop icon once it reached across the nation. Many people paid attention more to what they were watching rather than what they were told by NASA, the people with the facts. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c25909a042e,84FFEF07FB0D,Conspiracy theorists began saying that NASA was holding out on them by not saying the complete truth about their discovery ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c16f14a40761,84FFEF07FB0D,Scientists still held onto their beliefs and avoided correction by a few simple facts. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+6d97169ebb8e,84FFEF07FB0D,The time that the first picture was taken could have been a perfect time that the sun was creating a shadow. I believe that the Face is just shadows that are made by indents on Mars ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca85fff9c4d6,84FFEF07FB0D,You would need to have more than pictures of a rock formation to support your theories on whether or not alien-life does exist or not. More goes into a theory if you can support it with proper evidence. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7ec9ca1d8164,851B84DCDFCA,In 1976 something very strange was found by the Viking 1 spacecraft. It appeared to be a face on the surface of the planet Mars. With this discovery NASA scientists took further investigations into what this picture could actually be. The scientists looked at the picture and determined that it was not a face only a mesa that looked like a face because shadows were casted onto it. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+07e9c4efab5b,851B84DCDFCA,NASA realeased this picture to the public saying that this was not a face on Mars only a mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4d5582e9b78,851B84DCDFCA,"This attracted the publics attention and it became a huge pop icon that appeared in books,magazinse,radio talk shows,and even in grocery store isles for Twenty-Five years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cfde5dffeb93,851B84DCDFCA,Many conspiracy theorists thought that this could actually be evidence of life on Mars ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8fa282510a9b,851B84DCDFCA,But if this was true why would NASA not realease it to get a huge government grant to try and develope a way to send people to Mars to explore. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+35cb37ad88ef,851B84DCDFCA,"
+On April 5,1998 Eightteen years after the Viking 1 and 2 were shut down the Mars Orbiter Camera came into orbit range of Mars and started taking pictures. The team of scientists espiecially focused on getting a picture of the face so they could reveal to public that there was indeed no face on Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85cd92684d1a,851B84DCDFCA,The picture came back alot more clear and showed that there was no face on Mars therefore stating that there was no ancient civilization that NASA was hiding. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5270fafd8d1,851B84DCDFCA,"On April 8,2001 Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough to take another picture of the face,And this time the scientists angled it perfectly so they had the best possible picture to stop all the non-sense about the face on Mars. They took the picture and enhanced it three times the size. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fbe78ed26fc,851B84DCDFCA,"This picture was released to public and it showed that the ""Face"" was actually a martian equivalent of a mesa. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+98f4b49b3e19,851B84DCDFCA,"In conclusion there was no actually face on Mars,And the entire time it was only a landform which there are very many of on the entire planet of Mars.      ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f0ce5224c716,852FFC3A2437,"In my opinion, Im against of the value of using technology to read students emotional expresses. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+53ac5a6d3018,852FFC3A2437,Not every student wants another person nor even technology to know what their emotions are. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a5d2d95f4da,852FFC3A2437,"I believe all people go threw something in life and that they just want to keep that something a secret. I also believe that in life we have to go threw a path on our own ; there would be sacrifice , tears and smiles but its apart of growing up and facing reality. Not everyone gets the same amount of help as the other person. Some people just need their worth to try living on their own. A bunch of students dont have a mom , dad or they dont even have both. Some student live their lifes without parents , who will they be able to trust ? In this article , I believe other people like this idea that their willing to help people out but some people rather just face their problems on their own. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77d68c10ccda,852FFC3A2437,Dont get me wrong though . Its quiet an amazing work for actresses that are willing to improve their acting skills, It has quiet pontiental that they invented a 3-D computer to identify mixed emotions. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,
+f6acaff3beba,855398650C01,I believe that the Facial Action Coding Sydtem could work. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2d56a48d3566,855398650C01,"From what I read, it is pretty high tech and they know what they are doing. If they ad these to classrooms to tell how boring or fun they are and how to make them better I think some kids would actually want to go to class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e67745ca7d89,855398650C01,"There are three things I think really make this possible,and they are muscle scanning ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ba6f6934cce,855398650C01,used for interigation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae3acfd7ece3,855398650C01,making class better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+390596e46a85,855398650C01,The muscles in faces can really tell the actual expression of an individual or even an entire class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d7d1b52ba0f5,855398650C01,"In paragraph 3, line 2, the author says, ""All 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles."" This means it uses 44 different muscles in the face to figure out someones emotions. This can be very accurate it seems like, if you have an investigation and you have 44 pieces of evidence, how likely are you going to be right? Very likely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7e55706e5cd,855398650C01,"That brings me to my next example, interigation. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+483c1c025210,855398650C01,"imagine you have 8 people who have been caught and there was a murder. If you ask all 8 of them I garantee you will figure out who murdered the person. In paragraph 7, line 12, the text states, ""They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e5f0c1a55a0,855398650C01,"This can tell you if a person is lying or not, along with a couple other factors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+730ed61add9f,855398650C01,"Lets say someone is being asked a couple questions, if they asked the person if he broke into a house recently they can tell if his stress levels are high. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d13ab06351f2,855398650C01,Then we can also make class better with this facial scan. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc9654119b66,855398650C01,If they put this into a classroom more kids would want to go to class because it can make class better. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a73178bce69,855398650C01,But it can also have some down sides. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9a00b0b983ff,855398650C01,Some teachers might use it to be more serious and less fun. Then kids wouldn't want to go to school and just stay home. But if the classroom is more fun and less stressful the kids won't learn as much ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f263550e9e19,855398650C01,"In paragraph 6 line, the texts says, ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"" this means they can have ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b53f8498b51,855398650C01,the computer tell them what they are doing wrong and change it to where the classroom is fun but you also get alot of learning in. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3b894c5206e4,855398650C01,This is why I think it could work. this is a very smart idea for the future and I think that most people would like this idea too. It can really change the future and these are three ways I think its a good idea. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+27b8728d95bb,8555ED31A266,"Our solar system revolves around many different planets, one being Venus. There are many people who study each and every one of the planets in our atmosphere, from the distance it is from us, to the gravitational pull, to its velocity, etc. To have a better understanding of each planet, technology has helped immensly as well as going into space and seeing everything for ourselves in person. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2b1e3850a663,8555ED31A266,"Being an explorer in space comes with both good and bad things. For example, as stated in the passage, ""no spacecraft has yet to survive the landing or visit to Venus."" Many people may not find this as a huge issue due to the fact we humans aren't necessarily built as spacecrafts, and of course I agree, but in my opinion that is still a risk. Another con is that Venus is the hottest planet, although Mercury is closer to the sun ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+681eb9e24f99,8555ED31A266,"as the author mentioned in Paragraph 3, Venus can be deadly due to the pressure and heat it holds. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+419554a4c5cc,8555ED31A266,"
+As everything else in life, there can be a good outcome. I believe learning about what is surrounding us outside of Earth is very important. Not only will we be infromed, but there has been said that there was life in Venus almost as much as we have on Earth, they don't call Venus ""Earth's twin"" for simply no reason ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90cf2657225a,8555ED31A266,"I strongly believe that we're closer to a better future each and everyday that goes by, scientists, geologists, etc all try to capture some sort of new information that can possibly help our future in a good and positive matter. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc30980b88a2,8555ED31A266,"In conclusion, all the information the author of this passage provided me with gave me a better understanding on whether or not it's worth it to continue trying to discover more about this similar planet to Earth ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ae44010c8a8,8555ED31A266,"From what I read, I can intake that yes it can be dangerous as I stated in the second paragraph, it can risk lives, but at the same time life is full of risks. It's important to me as well as I'm sure it is to others, to know if there can be another life somewhere completely different and that not being a state or country by any means, it's literally a different planet. Therefore, traveling outside of Earth is a huge challenge, but fear shouldn't stop us from gaining such innovation for our future. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+174f6b640d0f,8579CD3051BD,The advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+558704e21ea2,8579CD3051BD,less pollution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a877ee005ae4,8579CD3051BD,"less traffic, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3811467935e,8579CD3051BD,less money involved ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2937ff250585,8579CD3051BD,"For example, in the German suburbs, large garages that are at the end of development where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home. So cut down cost on that Germany people have given up their cars.
+
+Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg, near the French and Swiss borders. That doesn't mean that car ownership is not aloud but there is only two places to park, large garages and homes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61105cb05a5b,8579CD3051BD,This cuts down on money costs for Germany by a long shot ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+195d3133945d,8579CD3051BD,Although citics may say that it will be difficult for people to get around ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9d7112057b74,8579CD3051BD,"it stands that people are just happier this way. For example, Heidrum Walter is a media trainer and a mother of two says, ""when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way."" ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+47ce923f07d5,8579CD3051BD,"In Paris, they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city, after days of near-record pollution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bb8c80990a3,8579CD3051BD,"Motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). Same for the odd-numbered plates the following day. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined. Which is an effective way to lessen pollution in Paris since it is so polluted in the first place. They also said it was easier to imagine than a car-free Champs-Elysees. Doing this got them great results as well, congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France after five days of intensifying smog, which is rivaled by Beijing, China for being known as one fo the most polluted cities in the world. The smog was cleared enough on Monday for the ruling French party to recind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ca9dea71477,8579CD3051BD,"In Bogota, Colombia millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day. Which left the Colombian streets devoid of traffic jams. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a8278669c1b,8579CD3051BD,Traffic jams are pretty annoying and no one wants to go through them so making up a day like this is extremely good for the environment and for your phyci as well ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d939ad65eab5,8579CD3051BD,", it is important to know that all of these things these countries are doing are for the good of the world. It is good that it is more of a mandatory participation then a optional objective so that people won't take global warming seriously even though it is.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+43186a1e7ba8,858751B7BB17,The challenge of exploring venus is so one knows what is there. Pluse no one knows anything about it soneone would have to go. Then agian it would take forver to get there and there whould be no air maybe bc its in space. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+42c68bfc2dc2,858751B7BB17,"See no ones ever visited venus be it is far away and no one has done reserch on it to see if theres liveing things on there or not so someoe whould have to do that. Then someone would have to go up there maybe put a drone or rover on it drive it around and see. Then someone would have to go back up there and get the rover then look at the video to see if anythings there. Then we would have to see if theres air on this planet so maybe one day humans can live on a differnt planet. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d0dbd155341,858751B7BB17,That is why we don'go to venus yet because then we would have to built better rockets. Then we would have to get astronut food and make sure they have air helment just in case. Maybe some jet packs just in case. they get stuck and cant find a way back. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a25a71e85b78,85882575BD1C,I think that everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6a4b1d9c838,85882575BD1C,you get to travel over water. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ac308c26c25,85882575BD1C,By traveling over water you can see fun things like sea animals and you can also visit cool places. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+958de573e2e1,85882575BD1C,If you like animals or if you take care of animals then this is the thing for you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+98d535fc2949,85882575BD1C,"you get to take care of animals so that way they can get to where they are going safely. Plus if you have never done it before, it would be a pretty cool experience because you also get to feed the animals on the boat ride and you get to give them something to drink. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fa74aa103cf,85882575BD1C,This would also be a fun and creative program because you get to do cool thing like watch dolphins and fish and all of the other sea creatures swim. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cf629dece055,85882575BD1C,"The way that this would be a creative program is because you could make up names for the animals. In the text it says, ""The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy."" So in that sentence, it proves that being a seagoing cowboy was a fun experience. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f48528c611b4,85983B2516C5,"While the idea of using a Facial Action Coding System in the educational process would certainly be interesting, I do not think it is nearly advanced enough to be able to be used in modern schools. ",Position,Effective,,,
+764d9b4e0ab8,85983B2516C5,"While the technology may be able to find the hidden emotions behind the famous portrait Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci, that does not mean it is in a position to help students learn. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97a97da7de33,85983B2516C5,"the Facial Action Coding System does not have the viability, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+20771bd7d624,85983B2516C5,"efficacy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ceab4005fb8c,85983B2516C5,privacy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4745ac98f345,85983B2516C5,"Even if we allowed camera's to scan the faces of students in school, we would not be able to decode their emotions in a speed befiting our educational system today. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07e493c04f3f,85983B2516C5,"At the seventh passage, the author states that, ""Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile,"" suggesting that the majority of modern computers do not have the power to actually run the software. The PCs that schools buy are almost never more powerful than the ones bought by consumers for household use, and would thus also not be able to process the data, making the technology rather useless in an educational setting. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0b2f2a939edc,85983B2516C5,"Even if a school had the funds to buy a computer that could process the data quickly enough to be useful, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+329d27ef475a,85983B2516C5,"there are simply too many students for that one computer to process, which would make the entire system useless. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+556a9ae553c9,85983B2516C5,"If we were to simply put that first fact aside and instead look at the ability for this technology to assist students in an ideal setting, we still find that students can fake their emotions in order to cheat the system. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c5e603a049f,85983B2516C5,"In the third passage of the artice, the author states, ""Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness ... and then associated each with charactersitic movements of the facial muscles,"" meaning that the software associated voluntary or involuntary movements of the face with emotions. The problem with this system is that students can change the look of their face quite easily, and can thus convince the computer to produce desired results, making the system disfunctional. There are quite a few reasons children, especially young ones, would want to make the software not work, including tricking the computer into moving from the original learning program into a more desired one and them simply wanting to see the program fail through their abilities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aea8a8eebec8,85983B2516C5,The idea of being able to find out the emotions of all of the chidlren in a school on a whim also rises privacy concerns that would need to be addressed before any program including this software would be implemented. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fecd0fd5e947,85983B2516C5,"The information gathered from students could be used for selfish purposes, as explained in the sixth passage of the article, ""if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different,"" showing that companies have use for this technology to better their businesses. If ad companies managed to get this emotional information from students all across the country, either from the government itself or through illegal actions, they could use that information to make new products and ads that would try to exploit the emotions of children. Because of this and the added concern of giving the information to the government itself, many parents would oppose a system that tracks and records the emotions of children. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b08b5cd575dc,85983B2516C5,"Because of the lack of availablity, the potential cheating of the software, and the privacy concerns involved, the Facial Action Coding System is not able to be used in its current state to benefit schools. While this technology could be used in the future to help students, for example students with mental disabilities, it is not able to do so as it is now. It will be interesting to see what this and similar technologies grow to be, for better or for worse. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2c111569363d,85A320C7B916,The author studies Venus the way some people study science and how others study math and English. The auhtor studies really hard on what he wants and needs to know. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8f35f395abe9,85A320C7B916,Some dangers that it persents would be that not all of Venus is safe and not all of space is safe either ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a82a0a5e324,85A320C7B916,Venus is a worthy planet because it does not have all of man kind on it destroying it or usig it. Venus is a place where some people go to see outisde of our world to see what space really does look like. ,Position,Effective,,,
+8d8859c9d7fc,85A320C7B916,"In parargraph 1 it talks about about of Venues is sometimes called the ""Evening Star"" and it is one of the most brightest points of light in the night sky. It is also known as Earth's twin because Venus is closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. It says in paragraph 2 "" Each perious mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours."" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aba7c1e874a3,85A320C7B916,"In conclusion is states in paragraph 8 "" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itslef, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into mnay equally intimidationg endeavors,"" Thoes words that came from paragraph 8 would probabaly be some what some danger but nit that much. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7fdd9f35f9a5,85B22ACB7FBC,The notion that cell phones should be used while on the road is very disturbing and quiet unacceptable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fc4534e85209,85B22ACB7FBC,"If your distracted on the road, Car accidents may happen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+055979a803a5,85B22ACB7FBC,These are the factors that have lead up to cell phones not being a good decision when it comes to safety and driving on the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+481c5b4ee413,85B22ACB7FBC,"In this day and age, mobile phones have become very addictive and hard to put down. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24337739fd74,85B22ACB7FBC,"While young teens drive on the road, all the focus often tends to go to a snapchat or Instagram post, not only do addictive habits lead to car accidents but students will also see a downfall in studies and other extra circular activates. Phones can often be helpful for the use of gps and other driving apps but could cause a huge accident if not handled by the right person. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66a3ef1030fb,85B22ACB7FBC,"Due to the brightness of the phone, it often leads to health issues, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63657abcda62,85B22ACB7FBC,"Long hours of your eyes being exposed to the screen could lead to temporary loss of sight witch is never good. Also, headaches occur when most people are on the phone to much long hours often affect the ears witch leads to more problems occurring then normal. Scientist have shown that the more time we spend on our phones the more time are bodies are being affected. Things like slouching or leaning could lead to permit neck issues and back sprains. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5da77bda344,85B22ACB7FBC,When your addicted to a phone driving and using the phone becomes a very hard. There is a new law in Georgia that says if you on on your phone while you are driving you will receive a ticket. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99777e2a0280,85B22ACB7FBC,Which is a good law and one that was very needed. There should be a law for that everywhere in the united states to help drivers so that they can avoid car accidents. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b57ec258e862,85B22ACB7FBC,"In conclusion, these are the factors that have lead up to phones on the road being a huge mistake. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f39f0a946d17,85D4CB998D62,"Although, many people may think that going to Venus despite the dangers is not a good idea going to venus can also be benitfical with new safety measures, and technolgy. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0d69c722ad16,85D4CB998D62,"One reason is, Venus is a sister planet to Earth but we don't know alot about it so we need to go there ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b573c56e028,85D4CB998D62,Going to venus can be benitfical in may ways ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+948901a08db6,85D4CB998D62,"One way is thet it can give scientist good research that they don't have. It can also give them a way as said in the article ""to examine more closely"". Lastly we could gain more knowledge on living conditions in Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87a0efd36461,85D4CB998D62,"Even though, Venus is not the safest palce for anyone or anything to be NASA has came up with new safetey measures to ensure the people's safetey ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4069a13cdf8e,85D4CB998D62,"For one as said in the article Venus is a hot place. So NASA has came up with the idea that the people that will be going to venus would be floating on top of venus so that they will not only be safe but alive. Another way to ensure saftey is to use silicon devices since metal melts on Venus, and studies have shown that using silicon is efficient, and in the article is said to last ""for three weeks"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70809b68f707,85D4CB998D62,"Furthermore, not only do they have saftey measures they also uses technolgy ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdc6663ec949,85D4CB998D62,"From past reasearch it is known that Venus burns metal so that means that to have good resaerch you have to find somthing that is not meatal to conduct your resarch. So NASA has made another project when they look at old technolgy, and they realised that mechanical computers would help when researching Venus. Mechanical computers conduct ""calculations by using gears and levers"". Also mechanical computers does not need electronics at all ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a095e0d37161,85D4CB998D62,In other words going to Venus can be very resourcful and problaly become of use in the future. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+72cf63071bd8,85E38E898579,"Venus is the second plant from the sun. People always called it the evening star because it is one of the brightest points of the ligth fromm the night sky when its dark, but the nickname was misleading because Venus was a plant. Venus migth be simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved to be an veery challenging place to see much closer. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+53cdfd63378a,85E38E898579,"One thing about Venus that it is the closer to Earth in way like the density and size and sometimes occasionally up close in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, these three plants are like right next to each other like they are friends or neighbors and other plants orbit the sun in a different type of speeds. The differences in speed is that, we sometimes closer to Mars and sometimes its Venus. Its like play musical chair, but the three plants goes in different speeds then each other. So, since Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space, humans have to sent numerous of spacecraft to the land on to Earth.
+
+Each pervious mission was a failed mission because no spacecrafts survived the landing, not even a few hours. And, its because a thick atmosphere that was a big atmosphere of amost 97 percent carbo dioxide blankets Venus. What's even more of a challenge are the clonds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere that maade the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what they experience on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd78b18488db,85E38E898579,"In conclucion, I think what the author study was good fact about the plant Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d4cf078a1b5e,85FD6510C00A,"Reisdents of VAUBAN that are car owners are allowed to park in two places in a large garage. alos at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home. some of the citizens where not to happy about the plan of having no car almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to reuters 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine.
+
+At the Mobile World conress last year in Barcelona, Spain, Bill Ford, executive chir man of the Ford Motor Company, laid out a bsiness plan for a world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical or undesirable. he proposed partnering with the telecommunications inustry to create cities in which pedestian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportaion traffic are woven into a cconneted network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.
+
+Levittown and Scarsdale, Newy York suburbs with spread-out homes and private garages, were the dream towns of thw 1950s and still exert a strong appeal. But some new suburbs may well look more Vauban-like, not only in developed countries but also in the developing world, where emissions from an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9cfd87e59e80,866DBF36BC7C,"The new technology that can describe how you are feeling from just ypur face is called, The Facial Action Coding system can be usefull in some positive ways or negitive,like it says in the articel you can read you classroom mines and you will know how they feel. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0e832c188701,866DBF36BC7C,In my opinion i think that they should use The Facial action coding system ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a1c6498d3583,866DBF36BC7C,because you never know what someone is hidding or what they thing about the lesson in class or the work in a job. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1ac01dddfcc,866DBF36BC7C,Also most of us will probably know how someone is feeling but some of us will not and that is were the Facial Action Coding system kickes in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c1e7bd8005f,866DBF36BC7C,The most important thing about his machine is that there has been people that committed suicede and if the machine can detect what you feel i think that ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4bd2a2166f98,866DBF36BC7C,it can detect those people or kids and that way thier parents or teachers could know and stop it from happening and that machine can save a life or two. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c783c0db8c39,866DBF36BC7C,The machine can be also be used for police officers that need to slove a case or thing that someone is lying ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+418d8eaf39a3,866DBF36BC7C,so they will just have to put the machine in thier face and ask questions and that will beb a win for th epolice officers ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+733eabe3c157,866DBF36BC7C,"The article also said that the drawing of Mona Lisa was not only smilling she was also, ''9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 83 percent happy and 2 percent angry''. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41ef268b3ce6,866DBF36BC7C,So if that machine told them all those percents in just a smile that the painting did that is amazing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01c8fb046b60,866DBF36BC7C,"The best way to put this is that anything is posiblie you just have to do it, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a42e752b920d,866DBF36BC7C,"Because in the article it says ''Moving you facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help prduce them put on a happy face. I alsways thought that mona lisa was just happy in a picture but never in my mind did i thing that she was much more than just happy. The best is yet to come and we will not be worried about the stuff that happens becasue of their emotions because the Facial Action Coding System will get us covered. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+71f2fd9dfa9e,866E03D00129,The Facial Action Coding System is an invasion of privacy and should not be used in classrooms or on students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7fdbf0dad668,866E03D00129,"Students should chose when and to who they reveal their emotions, and this system deprives them of that freedom. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dc242bb9a83d,866E03D00129,"As stated in by Nick D'Alto, most human communication is not verbal. Meaning that people express their emotions by their looks or their actions, but they chose when to do this. The Facial Action Coding System takes away this freedom from students, they do not have the choice when to express what they are feeling if anyone can just use a face scanning system on them. "" Imagine being able to detect exaclty how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions (D'Alto 1),"" this first sentence perfectly shows how it takes away peoples freedom of when they want to express certian emotions tocertian people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1b8ab16b04d9,866E03D00129,"Every human has naturaul rights, and in America everyone has the right to freedom of speech. But part of that right to speech is having the choice not to speak. The Facial action Coding System would take away people's freedom of facial expression or emotion. People should have the right to chose to who and when they express their emotions, and this system takes away these rights. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c46ed7e0dbed,86A3A166AA67,The Facial Action Coding System is a new form of technology that enables computers to identify human emotions. Will the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+90a645c97a3f,86A3A166AA67,"No. "" FACS"" will not be valuable to read the emotional expressions of students. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8197feeee2dc,86A3A166AA67,A theory and technology such as emotions and the emotional state of someone should be based off of science instead of being based off opinion ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+21c23e18e24a,86A3A166AA67,"Take a minute and compare this new piece of technology to a quiz given on the internet to see what celebrity I would be. Moral of the story if the person can fake it, they can make it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d5370553bcd,86A3A166AA67,"Someone can make believable facial expressions all day does not mean they are happy, sad, or any other emotion based on what they look like. A student may come in looking grumpy does not mean they are grumpy, maybe just maybe have you ever thought. "" WOW, that just might be their natural facial expression."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fd7f7794bd2,86A3A166AA67,"To end with, unless this technology is enhanced and backed up with science instead of opinion I do not think it will be very dependable in determing the emotional expressions of students. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3c77970cb8a2,86D1F207868B,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Some people may feel that it is better to have these projects student-designed rather than designed by the teacher themselves. Both project criterias have their positves and negatives, but the teachers should be the ones making the assignment. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+49f7959212ef,86D1F207868B,"Now while a student-designed project has its benefits, the teachers should be designing the assignments ",Position,Adequate,,,
+88e4b787c6b0,86D1F207868B,what is best for the student ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+30ab721b9348,86D1F207868B,the material the students must know before coming to the class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+efeca50b5f36,86D1F207868B,This statement could be countered with a claim that states that the students should design these assignments to help insure that they better understand the material. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+75ab2eedc7a3,86D1F207868B,The students could make a project that is accustomed to their own personality and the way they think. The students making the project may help the information get through to them better than the teacher could. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66a5837e9f56,86D1F207868B,Both ideas have great benefits and help the student in their own way. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+fc9fad812fc2,86D1F207868B,The teachers know what is best for the student and the material they need to be successful in the course. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+350f10bcdfc2,86D1F207868B,The students may confuse themselves because they haven't actually learned the information yet. The students don't know exactly what the course is actually about. The teachers know the material and everything the student will learn during the course of the year. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4d4e5f6c2bd,86D1F207868B,The teachers have spent years familiarizing themselves with the information and have gone to college to learn this stuff. The student has not yet taken the course and is not as familiar with the information as the teacher is. The student would be more beneficial by having the teacher tell them what they need to know and learn before taking the course. I believe these things because the teacher has more experience in this field than the student does. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01eb0101e2c4,86D1F207868B,"Overall, both ideas are great and really help them learn the material well, I just believe that the student would be better off by having the teacher design the assignment. The teachers know exactly the material the student needs to know to be successful in the course. The teacher have spent years familiarizing themselves with the information invoved in the course. The teachers should be designing the assignments because what is best for the student and the material the student must know before coming to the class. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+539a1dcebb38,86E5ADAE8206,"As a student, one of the worst situations is one where an assignment is given that is unclear, vague, or otherwise difficult to understand. Completing projects is usually a laborsome enough activity on its own, but when the question or prompt is incomprehensible, it turns a small hill of a task into a mountain of one. Too many students have been in this situation and know what it is like to be immeasurably confused and frustrated because the assignment is too difficult to interpret. To make matters worse, students quite often do not know how to contact their teachers during the summer, so they are given no help or clarity as to what they are supposed to do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e345ea1cc187,86E5ADAE8206,"To avoid this, as well as a multitude of other issues, summer projects should be designed by the students, ",Position,Effective,,,
+c361bbe76a81,86E5ADAE8206,they understand how to design the project to make it more ideal ,Claim,Effective,,,
+966ba4c33759,86E5ADAE8206,"it will allow the students to have more control over which direction the project is taken, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6879a8adf073,86E5ADAE8206,it would also benefit the teachers by stopping them from having to do even more work. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e9a68e523193,86E5ADAE8206,"Different people can take different pieces of information away from the same things. Sometimes people will pick up on completely different parts of text than others would. This should not be an issue, but when a teacher is pushing for students to make a project from one angle or perspective, it could prove very restricting since they did not form the same viewpoint on the information ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29327d90f094,86E5ADAE8206,"By designing their own projects, students could eliminate this obstacle and just create something based on what they took away from their learning ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d3003b740c1,86E5ADAE8206,This would help students to be much more creative and would allow them to properly highlight what they learned ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9defb674f97,86E5ADAE8206,"One could argue that this is counter intuitive since students would not all have the takeaway the teacher wants them to gain, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+58dcdf85a3a4,86E5ADAE8206,but summer projects are once again just about assuring that students are learning and usually not followed up on as true assignments. The question of if a student learned the same thing as everyone else should not be as important as them just learning something relevant in general. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+0d6f44640172,86E5ADAE8206,"Giving students control over what they do for a summer project could greatly benefit their learning. By requiring them to design the project themselves, students are then also required to step up to the plate and be more responsible and creative. Learning to develop these characteristics is far more important than any history or science lesson their project may be on. As stated earlier, summer projects are usually not followed up on, making students even more likely to forget what they learned about from them. And at the very least, making the projects student-designed would save teachers from having to do it themselves, which they would most likely appreciate since they are already given enough work as is.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b56c65993313,86FD29FA8938,I think that the Facial Action Coding System is a good idea for the studetns in the classroom. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c769a2e58eec,86FD29FA8938,"It may be good for many different other things, for example if someone needs help or in danger as in they could be crying showing that they are scared. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2edb62f7be3c,86FD29FA8938,"But I feel they should take it a little more exstreme for things like could also have audio and could really help with peoples lives. Not even the bad emotions if you are happy or exicted it can sense that and something good could happen. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+611485f1decd,86FD29FA8938,One reason I believe this would work because there is so much danger and anything can happen and we could use extra protection. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fc7482d66f3,86FD29FA8938,"But I also feel that it could be more to it then just looking for emotions. Even if they are good emotions there should be something to say or something should light up when the senseor feels that you are happy.
+
+They should test it out and see how it goes and turns out for some people and if things go good the they should move it to the next step and add audio and see how much it makes a impact on peoples lifes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+14bed50bf54f,86FD29FA8938,Another reason I feel that it might work is because sensing peoples emotions is great. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4e45f1c4ca9,86FD29FA8938,"Peoples emotions shows alot it can say so much about their personality or how they feel about life, it could even gives you signs about that person and could get people aware so they can put thst person in a safe place if they need to. There should also be bounderies because most people arn't gonna want a computer screen or phone screen watching them, their emotions or even listening to them. But to even fix that you could always have were you could turn the senseor on an off just so people could feel more surcure. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ca52d84bd666,86FD29FA8938,"Overall my thought about the Facial Action Coding System is great. You can take it so far and you can keep it how it is. Even if graphing shows that people don't like it I still think it is a good idea for me thinking saftey wise.
+
+Thats just the people life and you can also take it very far with paintings. I think this idea is a million dollar hit and it should be tested out. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+375561f0c457,86FFB72A8AE3,"here are the great value of using technology.
+
+there is sofeware that can recongize emotions better ways foe human and computer to commmunic. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+06f3e7dafae2,86FFB72A8AE3,"the process begins with thecomputer conster a 3-d mold of the face there are 44 mojor muscles in model that make a action untit.
+
+classfild as happyiness , suprise , anger , disgust , fear , and sadness when your frontails rise when suprise or you orbicular oris will tightens your lips to show anger . facial expression are univer observers .
+
+Can track exprees in the mona lisa as human everyday we perfrom samne imprees calculation every day tell if your freind is sad by looking at her or his face look at human art we can see what the painter or paniting was express . with this you could ue a mirror that look at your face express to see a differt of a genunie smile and a forec one new computer sofeware we cold maybe croack a new da vinvi vode thing tenconly is be come great use of our time see what engone the paint is desiceing ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8a718976b5d,877F6174E222,The author uses connotations by suggesting that venus is a worthy pursuit is studying but the dangers that it has is that it's the hottest planet in the solar system ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a9f776916bd,877F6174E222,"went through the greenhouse effect while is was being created. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets around it. The temperatures on average is around 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus has more powerful earthquakes,erupting volcanoes and frequent lightning strikes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f13da52b754,877F6174E222,"It says that NASA is working on approaches for getting to venus. Like for example,simplified electronics made of silicon carbide has been tested through a chamber. A vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the ground but the surface would still be hot at around 170 degrees fahrenheit. Venus can sometimes be a good planetary visit. The planet has rocky sediments on its surface such as valleys,mountains and craters. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5239bb768e3b,877F6174E222,A phone or a tablet being exposed to acid could be heat capable to melting just imagine what that would be like. By comparing it with a system that uses mechanical parts the system can be made to be more resistant from pressure and heat resources. Many researchers cannot take gas or rock from a distance. Humans would survive if there is solar power from venus. When trying to meet the challenge venus presented it has value the human curiosity will lead to us to many intimidating endeavors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4fd4c1134610,8783DB652376,"There are advantages of limiting car usage, but not as much as you thought. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d688636d4107,8783DB652376,"According to Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother, when she had a car, she was always tense. Now that she told it, Walter seemed to be much happier. In Freiburg, Vurban's streets are ""care-free"". But, once you go to the main thoroughfare, cars will be sworming down the road. Most people may think, ""I need a car to get to where I need to go faster."" ""I can't live without a car.""
+
+In 2006, trend in Europe grew... No cars or anything. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs where middle class families from Chicago to Shanghai make their homes. Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions. 50 percent in some car intensive area in US. Home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in low car suburban life.
+
+Levittown and Scarsdale, New York suburbs with enormous rich people homes with private garages were dream towns back in the 1950s. The US is promoting ""car reduced"" communities, and legislators are starting to act. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+16d353f09011,878BE2C1F6FB,Cell phones one of the most important technology in today world since cells phones have been created almost no one can do without them. Phones are so important to us that we need them in case of emergency. family or friends that are away from us or international from a different county. we all known that driving is one of the number one cause of death. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+61cebeaf91d7,878BE2C1F6FB,While driving is a privilege we have today. When you text and drive you not only put yourself at risk you put innocent drives at stake ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7a8b34fb67af,878BE2C1F6FB,"Just recently the state of Georgia ban the use of cell phones while driving. I believe there is no text back to that person that can not wait. We should take life precious. in the UK cell phones are banned. I believe all call phones should be banned. Recently researchers have come up with a way of using our phones while driving.
+
+In order to do that they have came up with advanced vehicle that we can make phone calls with touching our phones by using the aux. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c1bce9f1e80,878BE2C1F6FB,I hope as we move forward in life people can learn from each other's mistakes. Texting while driving is the worst thing to do you can . loose your privilege or suspended license. Even worse you could kill someone while walking. So the question is does it really worth texting while driving?         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d17150c970b1,879F0C1C09CD,If I was in this situation I would like tell them to take an even better camera. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b504626fd538,879F0C1C09CD,"And my explanation for that is because if they want to have a more clearer picture then they should take another one up there. And again they might even get an even bettere and bigger because of the technology we have today. It might be even in high definition so that they can see if thats actually a face or if its just a mountain with craters. But they might get me wrong and thats ok but as long as they have a better camera to explain how or what i'm right about. Like in the beginning of this article it said that they had take pictures in 1976, 1998, and in 2001 but all of those pictures are on cameras that make pictures blury and in order to see if the picture was actually a face they had to do something to make that picure clearer than it shows. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db55718022c9,879F0C1C09CD,They might argue that im wrong because they might say that why will they need the technology and they might say like well we already have a picture and its a face. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7c199bca6699,879F0C1C09CD,"But it could possibly be something else. It could be a mountain with craters, it can be mostly anything. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8b5f7c5299e7,879F0C1C09CD,I also could be wrong becuase they do have a Mars rover up there so my theory can be wrong and it is a face all along. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+87cb12b5a718,879F0C1C09CD,If I was the a scientist at NASA talking to someone about why the face on mars wasent created by aliens i would tell them that extra terrestrial life couldn't of done that ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ed25c938e10,879F0C1C09CD,because we dont have enough evidence to prove that they exist. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ee735cf06a0,879F0C1C09CD,"But for now we don't know 100% that aliens did it or if metors hit it and it looked like a face or if aliens did it. And if aliens really did it then we need to get nother camera up there and see if there is any other life out there. Then the person who is asking that question would say ""havent you guys already put one up there and theres nothing"". Then I would come back and say then why do you think that aliens did it if we got nothing on the cameras that we sent up there. So he would be kind of wrong if we dont have any evidence that aliens are out there. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b9b5e7ce1a8,87A3A28A5EB8,"The principal has decided that all students should participate in at least one school activity. For example they can participate in sports, SCA member, or even gaming club. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+27d64378f857,87A3A28A5EB8,Me myself agreed with this decision ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e309208f8785,87A3A28A5EB8,we all need to stay active in some type of sport or school activity if not we are not going to be involved in things. Also if you dont like any of the activities talk to your principal about adding some other things that you like. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da33289ab97b,87A3A28A5EB8,Students should try out sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c05d317572d,87A3A28A5EB8,"if you have been practicing basketball or football and you think your good enough to make the team just try out and see if you'll make it. Also as well if you dont play sports but you try out for a team you might just like and get real good at that sport. We even have a better idea say if you can dance or cheer you might can talk to your principal about being your school mascot you might can get some fans,or have a cheer leading team for the sports. Try to talk to your principal about having a concession stand to sell snacks to the players and people who come watch the game. If you are good at keeping record you can be the person who keeps track of the fouls, timeouts, and keeping track of the numbers scored. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c499ddf84a4,87A3A28A5EB8,The SCA is when host the school dances or fundraisers. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28f36e78fbed,87A3A28A5EB8,"They do school dances by getting it all planed like getting a DJ, food, games, buses. Also they do fundraisers because this is how they get money for school equipment like new PE equipment and better technology so we can have better computers. But the school dances help with these things to. This is why we need all the school dances and fundraisers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2678868f6285,87A3A28A5EB8,The gaming club is not a sport but it's competitive thing ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+42f2baadbe08,87A3A28A5EB8,The gaming club is for people who does not like to play outside don't like getting hurt. You can compete against people in battle games or sport games. Say if you like sports you just dont like playing it in real life only in video games because it seems better to you thats okay. Thats why the gaming club is so cool you can play it on TV instead of in real life. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4cd7bdabc08,87A3A28A5EB8,This is why you should be involved in at least one activity its so many to choose from. So there is no reason to not be involved at all. You might just want to try other activitys out just to how those ones are and you might just like it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+62201cf4a3ae,87A6EF3113C6,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", uses many scientific facts, data, and explanations to support their idea of exploring Venus. In the passage, many examples are given of why scientists would want to explore the possibilities of the contents of Venus despite all the dangers. ",Position,Effective,,,
+00c3cb8cb453,87A6EF3113C6,"The text gives some support like declaring it the most Earth-like planet, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23a1bb23f9b5,87A6EF3113C6,"the possibility of supporting life forms, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e86fb6461efa,87A6EF3113C6,multiple explorations to Venus that have been successful. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11fa51ac176e,87A6EF3113C6,Venus' relation to Earth is significant because it is the closest example of another planet like Earth. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c147d343fbf5,87A6EF3113C6,"The author claims that Venus is even called Earth's twin and that not only is it like Earth in its density and size, but also in the distance between the two planets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4336f1e73855,87A6EF3113C6,Even though the planet is very similar to Earth there are challenges to get accurate data on the planet because of the many spacecrafts that were unable to withstand the harshness of the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f4b7a43f219,87A6EF3113C6,"As technology advanced, the author claims that more and more missions to Venus occured, and even around the time of World War II there was a spacecraft that survived in Venus conditions for about three weeks. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9af414182462,87A6EF3113C6,Venus' conditions are very harmful to the life on Earth but there may have been a possibility that life could sustain on the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a434f155cc57,87A6EF3113C6,The author describes Venus as a planet mostly covered in large oceans that could have suppported life growing there. All of these examples that the author has given supports his idea of the need to explore Venus tremedously and gives very convincing evidence and data that supports his idea. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f50a1a2f6eb8,87A6EF3113C6,"Although Venus is a very harsh planet and there may not be any possibility of life, it would still be worth it to explore this planet and how it works. The author explains in detail what Venus is like and supports his ideas with scientific facts and data. There is a possibility that life could sustain on Venus but that is unknown unless the option is explored.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1be8599ab534,882808C92A6E,using the techonology of emotionalnally expressions of students in a classrom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7bfff9defc82,882808C92A6E,"because it identfies mona lisa's emotions how one picture can describe her self as calculating emotions. constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human mules. movent one of one or more musles. movent of one or more musles is called an action untit in fact we humans preform this same impressive caluculation every day for instance you can prolly tell a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face of corce most of us would have trouble actully describing each facial trait that conveys happy wooried etc ..... i oberserved that artist such as da vicci studies human anatomy to help them paint facial musles precilely enough to convey specific emotions his new compuer sofftware stores simlar anatomical imformation as electronical code. the mona lisa demostrating is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad . by the way, did making a happy face in this experiment also mmake you feel slightly happy ? accoring to the facial feed back therory of emotion moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them. whoever thought that amking faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f14f8e7eae47,8836AD393A34,"Around the world we have been seeing trends of reducing automobile usage. Reducing automile usage would have a number of advantages but it must be approached in the right way. If the US were to attempt to ""limit car usage"" as the prompt states, the movement would undoubtedly recieve a lot of push back and would slow to a stop ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6f73f35cc2b3,8836AD393A34,. Reducing car usage by building public transportation and smart suburbs would be ideal. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b37345e8a1d0,8836AD393A34,cut down our co2 emissions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01bc305dbebe,8836AD393A34,"reduce the number of car related injuries and deaths. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+20c36426418c,8836AD393A34,"if there is one thing I know about American politics, its that political parties will oppose just about anything, no matter how advantageous or logical, ""limiting car usage"" is no exception, if the Democratic party were to suggest such a thing, it would create an upoar from the Republican and Libertarian parties. This would become more controversial than gun restrictions, we would have another surge of anti-environmentalism propoganda, Limbaugh would be spitting ""tree-huggers"" again, and more likely than not, our country would drift even further away from any sort of environmental solutions. Trying to limit car usage on a Federal level would be met by utter failure. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+11fac50d24fc,8836AD393A34,"there is a right way to approach this issue in the US. If we were to ask for grants to build public transportation systems, encourage car-pooling, and build efficient bike paths, car usage could be significantly reduced. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13a9a0b4b001,8836AD393A34,"The advantages of reducing our use of automobiles in the US are well worth the cost.  Transportation is the second largest contributor of co2 emissions, just behind power plants. (Rosenthal, paragraph 34) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+484b14777ac9,8836AD393A34,"Cutting these emissions, even by a fraction would have great benefits to our environment ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+106a22165f18,8836AD393A34,"David Goldburg, an official of Transportation for America states, ""All of our development since World War 2 has been centered on the car, and that will have to change, how much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid."" (7) The US has been moving towards a lower car use trend since the recession, ""recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by"" (29). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ad86450e30f,8836AD393A34,"reducing automoblie use in the US should be a goal, but it cannot be approached through laws or restrictions. We can model our suburbs and cities to be more friendly to alternate transportations, and we can build public transportation systems across America. The reduction of co2 emissions from cars will curb our contribution to Global Climate Change and make a better future for generations to come.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+810e267880d6,8855A0898835,Have you guys ever seen the unmasking face on Mars? If not you probably should! ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d78c8998d49a,8855A0898835,It's located on Mars at 41 degrees north martian latitiude. If you're sitting around bored at home just imagine all the amazing sites to see when you are visiting The Face of Mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+202cae0842b6,8855A0898835,"One reason people might go here is because of all the fun, excitement,and interesting tings on or around the face of Mars. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1c5c532806a4,8855A0898835,Like just imagine all the craters and the amazement for people all ages. Why sit at home when you can be emjoying yourself with various adventures. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8f508e413f5,8855A0898835,Another reason may be just getting out of the house and exploring. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1bf8b44e31d0,8855A0898835,You don't just have to stay in one area on mars you can go anywhere. Let me start by saying it would be an excellent experience for both kids and adults. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92d3052b0675,8855A0898835,Others say that hey found it boring and uninteresting. Look on the bright side not all people are like that some people might like the outerspace world. It just depends in what you like and dont like. Well I hope you enjoy your time while visiting The Face of Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7d1c1ea6ead1,887BBBE0CCC5,"
+From now, human can say we are have most feeling in the world, We can be sad we can be happy, we can be angry about something we can also say'' what's a pity'' but how to show us emotion? Use our face! someone said, how to know somebody emotion? Use our eyes! Somebody day again, but do you know that now we have now the number of you emotion.
+
+What's will like? For example one of most famouse art Mona Lisa, one lady always have a secret smille, she is 83 happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. So amazing right? When I saw the result maybe because of that Mona lisa have beautiful of time. Complate emotion very easy to touch people's heart. this software is form University of lllinois , they hope developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. How it work? The process begins with 3-D computer model easy to say just build a modle of the face and cumputer will calute the way muscles move and he can know the percent of your emotions, depend on each musclesthe cpmputer will know how ''happy'' you was. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b715517eeb2f,887BBBE0CCC5,So this prosses sound like cool but it just show how much computer can do it not meaing it 100 right. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d330f7809d41,88AF43473E2F,Why should you join the Seagoing Program? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ec0e7655e08d,88AF43473E2F,There are many reasons you should ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8361536495b6,88AF43473E2F,I had an amazing experience being a Seagoing cowboy myself. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+439c3a93932d,88AF43473E2F,"I think that you would also have an amazing experience. I got the chance to have this experience and it was honestly life changing. You might not want to do it because of being on the ship, but you can still have fun while on the ship. While on board you have a good time to enjoy playing games and doing your hobbies, here are some, table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading, and whittling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6d7dc520ab9,88AF43473E2F,When you're on the ship your demeanor will change right when you see the marvelouse sights ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c146d2fbc5a7,88AF43473E2F,"I had the experience of touring the excavated castle in Crete, seeing Europe and China, and marveling at the Panama Canal while on my way to China. As you arrive at where you are going, something to give you reassurance is knowing that you are doing something good. You are helping people rebuild and recover what they had lost. I had the I'm-on-top-of-the-world feeling as soon as I knew I was helping them get back what they had lost, and I think you will too. This chance is big for you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b712705dfc6,88AF43473E2F,"''Boom!'' You think in your mind as you look back at the distruction from the war and bombs. That melancholy feeling you get as you see all that has went on will change as you think of why you are there, and what you are doing. I know that you should join this program because it is a once-in-a-life-time chance. You will have fun as I did in my exuberant experience in this program. I have given examples to why I think you should. Just join the program and you will like it, I can promise you that. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a5ca95e8393d,88B8F8666DA0,We all love our phones now a days and basically ever since they were invented. Everyone has one or wants one or the newest latest one ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7365f15c0873,88B8F8666DA0,.Ever since they were invented in 1700s people have taken the full advantage of the telephone presidents and war sargents used them to win battles and etc. Now the phone has evolved from tube looking phones to brick phones to flip phones to iphones and to smartphones ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0c4f99258df4,88B8F8666DA0,"With all the new technology and apps like facetime snapchat3 games music social media there's almost no way anyone could ever put their phones down. But according to statistics in 2013 about 3,154 people died in accidents 424,000 were injured. In 2013, 10% of all drivers ages 15 to 19 involved in fatal accidents were reported to be distracted at the time of the crash. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9081cf65d1f7,88B8F8666DA0,"With all the crashes maybe we should drive without our phones but with the increments in technology we mind as well just use them cars are able to call people just like phones, so if you can call people in your car and be distracted anyways when your calling whom ever ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6c61182f03a8,88B8F8666DA0,There putting almost smartphones in the car so you can most defiantly be distracted with that. The fact that they are and already are making cars able to drive by themselves is anther reason that is very distracting just as in Tulsa the electrically powered car has pilot mode so it drives itself. So many people have been distracted from the road and driving because the car can drive itself even though the car can drive itself you still need to pay attention to the road. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1434a6b39ce,88B8F8666DA0,So you picking up a cellphone and calling someone can be distracting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f8b8cfbbbd1,88B8F8666DA0,there is a responsibility factor to firstly own a car and secondly to even own a phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be4ab66af0bf,88B8F8666DA0,"It might seem like it is not a responsibility owning a phone but it is when you own a phone you have personal information in it. If you were lose your phone and have never put a password or security code on it you can lose your information to whoever has your phone could be a hacker could be a random thieve. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+02e116445c0a,88B8F8666DA0,it really depends on your responsibility level if you can't stay off your phone and it's life then you need to let someone drive but if you can be responsible while driving then I'd say you should us your phone responsibly ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47622869b43c,88B8F8666DA0,Cause if you drive irresponsibly you should have your phone.        ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a8929b663d6c,88DD3D58EA57,"Driving a car has its ups and downs to life. It provides transportation, but it can also be very dangerous. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+20658067ffdb,88DD3D58EA57,Another issue with cars today is the amount of pollution that cars give off. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28ba35d73c54,88DD3D58EA57,"Smog is caused by cars and is not good to the environment and certainly not good for people to be breathing in. Both ""Paris bans driving due to smog"" and ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"" discuss the affects cars can have on the evironment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+59d80cbe81be,88DD3D58EA57,"""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"" and ""The End of Car Culture"" talk about the decrease of the amount of cars used today. Many communities today are turning into car-free places to clear up the smog and dangers of driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4214fa0f8cf0,88DD3D58EA57,"Smog in Paris, France and Bogota, Columbia have reached record pollutions and both cities do not want to deal with it any longer. Robert Duffer writes about how the Paris government enforced a new rule which allowed both even and odd numbered license plates to drive on a certain day and would alternate everyday. This was very beneficial, however some people needed transportation but would be fined $31 if their car was used on the wrong day. Being that Paris is one of the most famous capitals of the world, one would expect to see more smog than usual. Andrew Selsky also writes that in Bogota, Columbia, a day without cars was put into place in the 1990's and still continues today. Once a year, buses and taxis are the only transportation allowed in the whole city. If not obeyed, there would be a $25 fine. This day was put into place as an improvement campaign which also benefitted the city. Bike paths and smooth sidewalks were put in and during rush hour has cut the traffic in half. It also opened up restaurants and shopping malls which were widely used by the public. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7b04727c41e6,88DD3D58EA57,Life without cars can also be beneficial to ones community ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+96944ffdee9d,88DD3D58EA57,"few people will be buying gas or diesel fuel for their cars. Elisabeth Rosenthal tells her audience that Vauban, Germany has an upscale community where nearly everyone has given up their cars. Here, people sold their cars just so that they could buy a house in peace without having to hear traffic jams and honking horns all the time. Many say that this environment makes them happier because it is so peaceful. 70% of the community do nott own cars and the ones that do must leave it in a large parking garage outside the developement  that is purchased with the home. In another article, also written by Elisabeth Rosenthal, discusses America and the recent  decrease of the amount of driven by a single person. Research shows that the amount driven in 1995 is about the same as the amount driven in 2013. This is due to environmental protectionists who walk evrywhere they go and due to the dangers of driving. There are fewer young adults driving today as well; in eight years, the amount has decreased 23% ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+87ee62052151,88DD3D58EA57,"Many are giving up their cars today to make a better, happier living. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+58678c01d2d3,88DD3D58EA57,There are cities all across the world that are limiting the amount of cars being used. Smog is a very pollutive that many don't even realize. Many say that walking and biking around provides them with a more peaceful lifestyle. Limiting car usage will provide less smog in the air and will save you money from having to buy gas or diesel fuel.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1f0c8ec8383a,88FD7FAAFA90,Some school require students to complete summer projects. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+365f2cba9b4e,88FD7FAAFA90,"This is a great idea, and it would be better if the students would be able to pick the topic. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c5730ca328d6,88FD7FAAFA90,One of the reasons is students know what interest them more ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56832d613e48,88FD7FAAFA90,they would put more effort and time on the project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb11a6cfee48,88FD7FAAFA90,"studenst inprove there skills when writing something they enjoy. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2eb5bfc1c7b,88FD7FAAFA90,Students should be able to pick their topic do to they know what interest them and what doesnt. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d6eabd43f17,88FD7FAAFA90,"Generic_Name a student at Generic_School was given a project about sea animals. Generic_Name doesnt know nothing about marine animals and has no interest on the project. Therefor, Generic_Name has no idea what to say and its not in his interest. Furthermore, Generic_Name will be in summer break it would be less stressful to talk bout a topic he likes instead of a boring one the teacher would give out. Also the students would put more effort and time to the project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96ea3dec0224,88FD7FAAFA90,"by the student knowing what he likes and his strength they'll aim for that A on the project. Students alfound do poorly on school project due to the topic they were given. For example, Generic_Name was given the topic to right about sports Generic_Name. Generic_Name has never done sports her self so there she has no interest on it. Generic_Name will do the project and get finished on time but, did not put time and effort to do her best. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6d5906a5c556,88FD7FAAFA90,"Undoubtedly, students do better on a topic they all feel good about. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0344a0b41b00,88FD7FAAFA90,the students will enjoy doing the project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5133b74f7b9,88FD7FAAFA90,"Statistics show that when students write about something they like, they tend to improve in both reading and writing skills. For example, Generic_Name was able to right about a topic she likes, therefor, she enjoyed writing and improved her skills in reading and writing. Generic_Name enjoyed doing this project that she added more information about the topic. undauntedly, students summer project should be student designed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f063c3aeb4a3,88FD7FAAFA90,Despite this valid reasons there are does who think teacher should pick the topic. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+7383bc601cbe,88FD7FAAFA90,"How ever they are wrong. Because students should be able to enjoy writing, and with the prompts the teacher gives out they just get stress out. Unquestibily, summer projects should be studenst desinged. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+657d2ec3484e,88FD7FAAFA90,studenst will gain knolege and enjoy writing. They will aslo do better in the project do to is in there best interest. And finally a summer project should be fun not boring.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c412f5c37a3,899E6252BD6F,"Venus is called the ""Evening Star"" and it's one of the brightest points of lights in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from the sun. It has been often refered to as earth's twin. It's been over three decades since a spacecraft has touched down on Venus. The carbon dioxide level is at 97 percent, and their are clouds of highly corrsive sulfuric acid and the average temerature is 800 degrees in fehrenheit, and the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than our planets. This environment would crush a submarine even when its accustomed to diving in the deepest parts of our oceans. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system even though Mercury is closer to the sun. And the weather presents errupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on it surface. Venus once was the most Earth-like planet in our solar sytem that could have supported various forms of life like Earth. NASA has a possible solution to allow humans to study Venus, they will have to where we could hover 30 miles above the landscape so it'd be at sea level and the temerture would be at 170 degrees fehreheit, it won't be easy conditions but they are survivable for humans. They will be limited from what they can see and get. Others are trying for a more simplified approach by making electronics out of silicon carbide, which can last 3 weeks in Venus's conditions. Another one is Mechanical Computers which goes back as far as the 1800s and then played an important role in the 1940's during World War II. They made calculations by using gears and levers and did not require electronics at all. Modern computers are powerful. flexible, and quick but they are more delicate while a system made out of mechanical parts can be made to be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc7ef3ea3bd7,89A2F3489EC7,"To acess what one needs in the world today, many would think one needs a car. Currently, cars are a big part of transportation for many people. However, they are also major contributers to negative environmental impact as well as the decline of cities public areas and transportation. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e1817511452a,89A2F3489EC7,"Contrary to popular belief, limiting car usage can be benefcial to many. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+42347b8b0e6a,89A2F3489EC7,"Currently, throughout the world several car free systems are operating well. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+de6b1fd4fdbd,89A2F3489EC7,"A decrease in the number of cars on streets and highways would lead to positive improvments in public spaces, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+88ac1d699066,89A2F3489EC7,"public transportation, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+57bc802b2db0,89A2F3489EC7,the environment as a whole. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1b83cb8e8577,89A2F3489EC7,"In ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", author Elisabeth Rosenthal shares the story of Vauban, Germany and their efforts to reduce greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. ""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmisions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States."" The impact of these gas emmsions is incredibly negative on cities. They make the environment unstable and unsafe for a large number of people. These numbers could easily be reduced if fewer people chose to rely on cars as their mode of transportation. In some places the pollution caused by automobiles is so high that the government is stepping in to assist in the management of city spaces. In ""Paris bans driving due to smog"", author Robert Duffer explains this specific situation in Paris, France. ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day."" The effects of this temporary ban were also shared. ""Congestion was down 60% in the capital of France, after five-days of intesifying smog."" It is easy to see that just a small reduction of vehicles created a significant change. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+578968e71711,89A2F3489EC7,"In ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"" by Andrew Selsky, improvments to Bogota, Colombia as a result of less car usage is expaned upon. ""The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. It has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor. Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have been cropped up."" Cities are beggining to cater to the needs of those who don't  use cars. Their negative impact on city streets is finally being recognized, and many are taking action to improve aspects where they live other than roads. In ""The End of Car Culture"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, the author discusses the goals of the United States and its major figures to reduce total reliance on cars. In this article Bill Ford, executive chairman of Ford Motor Company shares his hopes. ""He proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which ""pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commerical and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected netowork to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety."" Many are striving to make public spaces more accessable to those who choose more concious methods of transport. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+535808a1d77d,89A2F3489EC7,"In ""The End of Car Culutre"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal the decreasing numbers of people getting licenses and cars is discussed. ""But America's love affair with its vehicles seems to be cooling. When adjusted for population growth, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis done by Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives, an investment reseach comapny."" In this article, the disregard full time use of vehichles is also shown. ""The Internet makes telecommunicating possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends. The renewal of center cities has made the suburbs less appealing and has drawn epty nesters back in. Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit."" People today can get access to a vehicle on command. Different resources make the constant use of cars unneccesary. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aa270f2b28ac,89A2F3489EC7,"The decrease in usage of and reliance on cars is important and positively impactful. As number of cars on the road continues to go down, so do global issues such as the deterioration of the environment. Communities grow to orient themselves around public spaces accessable to all. Getting a significant number of automobiles off the road plays a huge role in inciting change that benefits a wide array of people in the way of work, time, money, and more, in communities and worldwide. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f2f3c9d95f3b,89D979169B57,"Extracurricular activities are very important in a students life. They develop communication skills, social skills, and among others, your ability to work well with other people. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+34b5140acda0,89D979169B57,"On the other hand, they should not be required for all students to participate in. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+996f5c97671f,89D979169B57,"Although all students could possibly find something they're interested in when it comes to after school activities, such as clubs or sports, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9335491d5e7a,89D979169B57,not all students are capable of handling the responsibilities that come along with an extracurricular activity. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e9746404ba06,89D979169B57,"Have you ever come to the conclusion that not every student can even maintain good grades at school? For some children, it's harder to balance school work and their everyday life alone, but if you add an extracurricular activity to their plate of responsibilities, it may be too much for them to handle. For a principal to make extracurricular activities a necessity at school, is not very considerate. As an adult you must realize that not every person, let alone children, can handle the same work load as others can. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9801ed2fae1b,89D979169B57,"Even though research has shown that extracurricular activities can be very beneficial for people, as it pertains to their physical, and mental well-being, it can also be damaging if too much work is placed upon one person alone. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4658e659e070,89D979169B57,"Stress is a very common factor in a child's life, and the majority of it is from life at home, and the excessive amount of work received at school. But in comparison, some kids can handle the load, and like the responsibility given to them. Not all children are like that though, and that is what the principal fails to realize. Although the principal may not have come to light about the amount of stress that could potentially be put on the students, the gesture to make the activities a necessity was most likely at their best interest at heart. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a684e824a57f,89D979169B57,"For the kids that work well under pressure, or have the capability to handle the challenges they face, the change in the schools priorities for the students probably won't affect them as much. Although only one extracurricular activity would be required, not all students could be able to wisely manage their time to fit the activity in their schedule. Also, maybe not all students would be able to find something they enjoy with the options given at their school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3ce5f6e7027d,89D979169B57,"If someone were to make it a priority for all students to participate in an extracurricular activity, it would be extremely recommended for the person to make the activity choices an exceptionally wide variety, so that it is more likely for students to find the things they enjoy to do. With the exception of making sure that there would be an activity to match each students interest, the idea would not be too bad. But in the same breath, that'd require some type of survey or application of some type, that every student must take in order to find out their interests, so that way making the activities wont be as difficult. Although keep in mind, that not every student may want to participate regardless of whether or not there is an activity they might enjoy. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+486f3187c4d7,89D979169B57,"There are some students that just don't like the idea of doing extra work when it's not required. It's not necessarily that they're lazy, but they just dont see the importance of going out of their way to do something that they can't see the immediate benefits to. Enforcing the change could arouse some anger in a vast majority of students, and possibly parents, but if the students are given an option to not participate in an extracurricular activity, things would most likely run a lot smoother. Most people would call these types of kids, ""average"" due to the fact that they settle for the amount of work given, and typically don't want to exceed expectations. Perhaps making them participate in beneficial activities wouldn't hurt, they just need to be a little more open minded to the idea at hand. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eb87249631a9,89D979169B57,"the idea as a whole would potentially cause a lot of stress to the principal, considering that not every child will have the same perspective on the idea, nor will their parents. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bf6b7529fc51,89D979169B57,"Yes, the motion being taken will have several benefits, and several stressful altercations, but at the end of the day everyone is different, and not everyone is going to have the same opinion when it comes to this situation. Even though the principal is only asking each student to participate in at least one extracurricular activity, it still may be too much to ask of some kids, considering their life outside of school, and what they find important in their lives as far as activities go. But maybe enforcing this act could open not only the students' eyes, but the parents as well, that trying new things isn't always such a bad idea, sometimes we just need a little push to get us started. But despite all the possible benefits of the idea, it still probably shouldn't necessarily be a requirement for all students to participate in an extracurricular activity. You never know how much stress someone deals with just by handling their personal life, one activity may not seem like much to you, but for some people one activity could be a handful. Forcing the students to participate in activities that they may not like, could possibly lead to a decrease in social skills, instead of an increase.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a0f761158375,89EE36DCF117,"IN the Article ""Making Mona LIsa Smile"", the auther describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables ccomputers to identify human emotions like the Mona Lisa Smile. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1dbd8a0c672e,89EE36DCF117,"In the article it says that she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgust, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry somethings or technology cant do that or some people cant do that at all and that is suprsing but what they call it is the ""Da Vnci Code"" an the name sounds cool and makes seans.
+
+Well the whole process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of all faces; all 44 major musals in the model must move like human muscels. Movement of one or more muscels is called an ""action unit."" Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologist, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, Creator of FACS. Eckman has classifed six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger,disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef779cf21e05,89EE36DCF117,".Here is a example in the article 1. Raise your lips at the corner of your mouth.
+
+2. Than Squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrinking at the corner of your eyes.
+
+3 Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up, toward your eyes.
+
+According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emoton, moving your facial muscels not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.
+
+A renowned drama couch, Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotons on stage.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c004b136330f,89FC42E46703,"In recent years many citicens have stated that the so called ""face on mars"" is a martion monument. Well I have but one question for those few citicens. Do you have any proof? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+af5923ed8273,89FC42E46703,there is nor was there ever any real evidence supporting the martion monument claim. However there is evidence proveing that the face is realy a mesa! ,Position,Effective,,,
+18353ebdb8f6,89FC42E46703,When we first released the origonal photo we had hoped the public would take notice of mars. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0b0edc4578f3,89FC42E46703,Unfortunately many therorist now say that the face was undeniable proof of alien life! ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+422aa2edc024,89FC42E46703,NASA decided that better photoes were requiered to qwell theas rummors. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+673433d149d2,89FC42E46703,It took us twenty-two years to get better results. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d179cd431d5a,89FC42E46703,Even so the public still believed in what they thought rather than what they saw. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ff6980f31a8a,89FC42E46703,Three years later we recieved the best results possible. the photo not only showed no carvings but it also showed that there was no face at all! ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+617c4563a87a,89FC42E46703,"Instead we found that the face was but an ilusion! Shadowes were made by the landform creating a non-existant face! 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51865158771c,89FC42E46703,Thus the face on mars was proven to be fake and the public became dissapointed. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+80a1fad94cea,8A658A988B96,I don't think that studying Venus i a worthy pursuit ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e02c44f1430b,8A658A988B96,"because in the article it states that ""humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world,since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7168f287904b,8A658A988B96,"""meanong no space craft has survied for more than a couple of hours. The article also states that ""numerous factors contribute to venu's reutation as a challenging planet for humans to study""meaning its already a hard planet to study. The plant is also almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. Venus is also a very hot place,in the article it states that ""temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and a atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet"". The article also says that ""these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth"" meaning that the tempertures are way too extreme for us humans ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4af42c74545,8A658A988B96,Humans arnt even going to live there so what is the point of pursuing studying venus. i don't think that it is a good idea to study venus because there is far to dangers. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+839c26bd762d,8A8B13591181,"While owning a car may seem like the most important possession a person can have, it is becoming more beneficial to find a way to live without them. Cities around the world are turning in their cars, even if just for a day ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3ad2f30e4e35,8A8B13591181,it brings plenty of advantages to make up for what could be seen by some as a troublesome lack of easy transportation. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b79f251b25d1,8A8B13591181,"Both the environment and and the well being of the people are grateful for the new change, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f999a2a4f779,8A8B13591181,"according to ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, one can learn about Vauban, Germany, a place manifested so that residents of the upscale community must give up their cars. While residents are still permitted to own cars, they must be kept in large garages at the edges of the community. Here, the owner of the car must buy a space within the garage, along with a home in the residence. Parking on the streets is forbidden, along with driveways and home garages. The streets of the residency are completely free of cars, except for a few streets on one side of the community, and for where the tram to downtown runs through. Most of the citizens of Vauban choose not to own a car, or sold their car in order to move to the community, and find they are much more content in their lifestyle because of it. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, stated that she is ""much happier this way"", explaining that she was always tense while in possession of a car. This community was created as a prime example to showcase the advantages of limited (or forbidden) car usage, and it is now being used as the basis of the growing trend around the world, including America and more places in Europe, in which suburban life is being seperated from its former dependance on auto use. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99116a230cb8,8A8B13591181,the reduction of air pollution and smog has become a major advantage in the limitation of car usage. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+177e39a29cf8,8A8B13591181,"After suffering through days of near-record pollution, Paris, France had composed a temporary driving ban in an attempt to clear the air, according to Rober Duffner in ""Paris Bans Driving due to Smog"". The passage goes further to explain that the ban followed five days of smog that rivalled the likes of Beijing, China, which is widely recognized for being one of the most polluted cities in the world. Exceptions to the ban were made for hybrids and cars carrying three or more passengers, and public transportation was made to be free. Once the smog cleared enough, the ban was lifted and citizens were allowed back to the road, but the reduction of auto usage was what saved the air from becoming overly polluted. Moreover, in Bogota, Colombia, citizens participate in a car-free day, entitled Day Without Cars, once a year to reduce smog in the cities, according to ""Car-free Day is Spinning Into a Big Hit in Bogota"" by Andrew Selsky. Violators are charged with $25 fines, but, according to Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus, the people participate, and the turnouts are large. This day without cars, which has begun to spread to other Colombian cities, is a fantastic way to reduce both air pollution and stress, and is a part of a campaign to oversee the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, which, according to Mayor Mockus, is the most of any city in Latin America. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b26ee5e74459,8A8B13591181,"In addition, ""The End of Car Culture"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal tells the reader of the new goals created to cut down on America's greenhouse gas emissions. According to the passage, the goals, set by President Obama, have been graciously aided by recent studies which show that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and have been making less of an effort to get a license as the years go by. With transportation being the second largest source of the nation's carbon emissions, behind power plants, this pattern, if maintained, will most likely have majorly benificial impacts on the environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c66201c4773a,8A8B13591181,"All in all, there are many advantages that could easily come with limiting car usage, including the reduction of smog and a more pleasent lifestyle for the citizens who decide to limit or cease their auto usage. While transportation issues may arise when people begin to give up their motorized vehicle, or if they decide to not purchase one in the first place, as many already have, a quick purchase of a bike or the use of public transit can solve at least some of them.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+738883110bb6,8AB22571E72E,Luke's point of view convincing people to participate in the seagoin. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ada22be5787e,8AB22571E72E,"In the passage it states that you can make nine trips morethan the other seagoing cowboy. In the passage it also states that they had benfits of seeing Europe and China. This kind of proves how Luke's trying to convince.
+
+Another reason that luke trying to convince you. In the passge it states that Luke torned an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china. Another detail from the passage is that Katie farm as a boy had prepare Luke for hard work but not for the dangers at sea. This also can of proves how Luke trying to convince.
+
+Luke's point of view is first person beacuse he talks about how he got into seagoing cowboys .In the passsage it states that he had bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Next ,It states that a small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide ,keep   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0340af328ba1,8ABA260B3B98,"greenhouse gasses have always been a problem that riddled america and also politics, but many other countrys are limiting their usage of cars. paris even made there be specific days where people will keep their cars at home or be fined. paris is among the most densley polluted citys on earth, and they thought it might be good for everybody to take a break from polluting the city and maybe breath easy for a few days. almost 4,000 drivers were fined a total of 31 dollars (US) and 27 people had their cars impounded because they were upset about the fines. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3e4d768f96c2,8ABA260B3B98,"Its nice to see a country actually care about what it is doing to the enviroment, but it might take something big for other countrys to follow suit. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e40bf3c48e7a,8ABA260B3B98,"the small city in columbia bogota also took part in reducing the emmissions in the air. bogta encouraged the public to stay inside and anyone violating this rule was fine 25 dollars, many people would take out their bicycles and ride those around opposed to driving and polluting the air. the campaign in bogota bagan in the mid 1990s and has constructed 118 miles of bike paths ever since ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df1f4f38c87b,8ABA260B3B98,"other countrys should follow what bogota is trying to do, because if we dont pollute the earth too much then we can live her longer. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+da086545856e,8ABA260B3B98,"president obamas ambitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse emmissions, unveiled last week ,will geta fortuitous assist from an incipent shift in american behavior: recent studies suggest that america is buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer liscenses as years go by. that has left researchers pondering a fundamental question:has america passed peak driving? the united states with its broad expanses and suburban ideals, had been one of the worlds prime car cultures. it is the birth place of the model T; the home of detroit; the place where Wilson Pickett immortalized ""mustang sally"" just kidding im not gonna copy all of that. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+abe0edaf12b3,8ABA260B3B98,but really america has cut down on the use of cars and we should be proud. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c611f57401ef,8ABA260B3B98,"in nelson nevada there are no more cars to be found, people are literally flying everywhere! ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2c5d6663a971,8ABA260B3B98,"it sounds crazy, but its not ,because researchers in the area were working on a new unknown chemical when all of the sudden somehow the chemical got leaked into the citys water system and well it had profound effects on everybody and now people are flying everywhere, nelson nevada plans to make a super highway in the clouds including speed limits and even police officers. this has really changed society. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+06c5a9cd3932,8ABA260B3B98,"
+if we all just rode bikes everywhere then there wouldnt be emissions and we could save the world! sorry i know this essay kinda sucked but writing isnt my stronghold sorry.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+912314d42f90,8B19F3C51A0E,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+04ce97af1292,8B19F3C51A0E,"The reason is, Venus is the second planet from our sun. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+77d451906985,8B19F3C51A0E,Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88d88e39379e,8B19F3C51A0E,Even though Venus is despite the danger it presents studying can helps in thr future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b204b0c632cb,8B19F3C51A0E,"The study might not help now but when something happned on Earth, it surely will helps and will be worth it. Even if it doesn't help, studying and knowing good. Paragraph 5 says ""Not easy conditions, survivable for humans."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ffd605be073,8B19F3C51A0E,"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The conditions of Venus are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. However, peering at Venus from a ship or orbitting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atomsphere. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e664b122dd6d,8B19F3C51A0E,"In Paragraph 8, it states, ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should expanded to meet the very deges of imagination and innovation.""         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+14dce112c3d3,8B2B8A57D84B,We should go to Venus even with its dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6ec2307e48e1,8B2B8A57D84B,We humans could find out so many things if we do. There might be animal life or even oceans with life in it. We could learn what the ground texture is like. Even learn abiut the gases that are on the planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f78c7d11b027,8B2B8A57D84B,If we find life on Venus it would prove that their are other life out there ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+34ed06e3f2da,8B2B8A57D84B,"There could be life under the ground but we wouldn't know that cause we cant even get to the surface of the plant. If there is life on the plant we could learn how they world by watching. Maybe even with pictures. With oceans we could find if there are organisms in it. It would prove that there is a different kind of life on the planet. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+812ef93396e6,8B2B8A57D84B,With learning about the ground we could see what minarals it holds. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ce62c2693e2,8B2B8A57D84B,If its the same kind we have on earth or if there are ones we dont even know of. If we could grow plants in the soil or if there are plants growing in it. If we go under the ground there could be worm like creatures or even caves. Who knows how big the caves could be or what could be in it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bbdaac1f8ae3,8B2B8A57D84B,Now with getting to Venus. We would need a ship or rover that could with stand the pressure of the plant ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2ee630e131be,8B2B8A57D84B,One that could maybe could go under ground and have something stick out from the ground every once in awhile. Maybe even one that could stay in the water of the plant. If we can build a ship that can with stand all of Venuses wearher. Than we could study it freely. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a06866cb0b04,8B2B8A57D84B,This is why i think we should go to Venus. Or make a ship to Venus. With Venus we could learn many things. Find minarals we dont have on earth. Maybe even find more simalaerities between are planets. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3f7c8578030,8B4A0DD4A3AE,I think that luke did the right thing by saying yes to one in a lifetime opportunity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+34e0a24c7041,8B4A0DD4A3AE,People could have participated in the Seagoing Coyboy program but then again they didn't have to like luke he couldnt say know because it was on in a lifetime opportunity. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20959e933275,8B4A0DD4A3AE,In Lukes point of view to convise others to come would be it would be a lot of fun ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2e01d3cb42d8,8B4A0DD4A3AE,you would have a lot of fun you get to be with many people you can talk to people and you can even make new friends. The things that you can probably do there is make new friends talk to people have fun and be thankful you got . You can even bring your familey members with you or you can go a lone it is up to you but come and enjoy your self be happy make new friends and just be your self. You can always try something new rather you like it or you dont like it is is really up to you .You can come and everything but you have to obay the rules and do what you are told and listen. You can also be gratful that you got invitd to come and that luke wanted you to come you should br graeful rather you are or not that you got to go. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+507ccc4b7150,8B4A0DD4A3AE,This is what i think Lukes point of view for convincing people to come. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+148fe218d6a7,8B696D4A84A0,"The majority of Americans have the luxury of owning a car. A car of course, seems like a useful innovation. It gets you places quickly and efficently, and is easier than walking. Yet so many people drive cars that the roads get congested and clogged easily as the cars just idle in the road waiting for the traffic jam to loosen up. Car usage causes the enviroment to decline and an increase in air poulltion, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c8b39930d9de,8B696D4A84A0,it would be a great idea to lower car usage since it is so detrimental to the health of the enviroment and the health of the populace. ,Position,Effective,,,
+150912597748,8B696D4A84A0,An advantage to reducing car usage is a more benifical enviroment and a better overall health standard. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4a83e5d52d55,8B696D4A84A0,"""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some ... areas in the United States."" (Source 1). Personal cars directly contribute to greenhouse gas enissions and by cutting down personal car usage and encouraging the use of car pooling and public transportation we can decrease greenhouse gas emmmisions. Also walking and biking to your destination instead of driving helps encourage healthy living and habits as well as exercise. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+188bd2dca358,8B696D4A84A0,"Cars also cause poulltion and smog to hang over cities causing the air to be full of harmful chemicals, endagering peoples health and also causing a rise in asthma for the populace that lives inside the city. In places like Beijing,China smog and poulltion from cars cause the air to be so foggy and dirty that you cannot even see the sky. ""Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.""(Source 2). When Paris was accosted by the same problem they solved it by a temporary ban on driving to clear the air. Without so many people driving cars we wouldn't have these many issues with smog and it's effect on the enviroment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6d05034fdf90,8B696D4A84A0,With less car usage smog and pollution would drop. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+faf39d9cf27f,8B696D4A84A0,Driving not only creates an issue with air pollution but also with water pollution and the contamination of the earth. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+872e8bde3bf3,8B696D4A84A0,"Cars run on gasoline, a fossil fuel. Which is brought up from underground by drilling into the earth. Fracking often has a negative effect on the earth, often causing oil spills into the ocean or earth. The effect of the oil spill is  pollution and mass death of wildlife in that area. By using alternative methods of transportation such as trains,buses,taxis,subways, walking and biking we reduce the amount of gas used and also the amount of car emmissons released into the air. Cars guzzle gasoline and this causes a huge need for fossil fuel, by using cars less we lessen the need for gasoline. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9d7c7c0ee16,8B696D4A84A0,"Many people agree with the statment  that without cars their lives are easier and less stressful due to the fact that they no longer have to worry about traffic jams and car crashes as well as any other dangerous event that can happen while driving. This excerpt from the third source, shows a man's reply to the event Day Without Cars that takes place in Bogota,Colombia once a year. ""'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza.""(Source 3). This excerpt only furthers my point that less car usage causes people to be more calm and less worried or stressed. ""'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter"" (Source 1). This quote from source 1 which discusses a suburb in Germany that is car-free. This blurb shows another example of someone who became happier without a car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+732f39a42bf7,8B696D4A84A0,Another advantage to reducing car usage is less stress. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84b1272e7aaf,8B696D4A84A0,"Also to some people a car is just a backup for when public transportation falls through. ""They organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transporation or car-pool with friends."" (Source 4) By reducing uneeded car usage we cause a more effiecent society less dependent on cars and more dependent on better types of alternative transportation. ""'A car is just a means of getting from A to B when BART [type of public transport] doesn't work.'"" (Source 4). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44827ca7d413,8B696D4A84A0,"By improving public transport we reduce car usage which improves the enviroment and quality of life. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+473a87f45518,8B696D4A84A0,"Less car usage will help the enviroment as well as lower stress. ""Transportation is the second largest source of America's emmisons."" (Source 4). By eliminating uneeded car usage and introducing more public transportation and alternate means of transport we will be eliminating one of the greatest causes of greenhouse gas emissions in America. The advantages of eliminating car usage is less pollution, healthier living and a less stressful life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7e1eaec69d1f,8B882092B4A7,"The technology fro read the emotionals expressions, its something aswesome. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6493b19426ef,8B882092B4A7,"For example, in the articule is used the picture of the Mona Lisa, because this is a great example, she has detected many different emotions in her smile, something like, stay happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. She have many emotions in her face, can be change her smile. ""The process begins when the computer consturucts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles"". "" The facial expressions for each emotion are universal"". ""In fact the humans perform this same impressive calculation every day. ""For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4efc7e3a517e,8B882092B4A7,In this articule explain us how the computers now can check one smile and know if is a fake smile or a real smile ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cff01e50745,8B882092B4A7,"In conclusion, the computer now encode different emotions if write down some simple instructions. This help us for can know if the Mona Lisa is smiling or had another emotion in her face. Not only with the Mona Lisa, can use that with anotner person. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a97e6f3b0c9f,8BA8BA5260AD,"The Facial Coding Systemis a system that can tell your emotions by caculating the way you look and by one little look it could tell it all how your feeling it tells whether your mad, sad, depressed, happy, even mixed emotions. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+96d22e8479ed,8BA8BA5260AD,"
+I think the use of the Facial Action Coding System is a well needed thing for schools ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4a6837730a2e,8BA8BA5260AD,it could tell your teacher whats going on whether you need help or not ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0dc83198373d,8BA8BA5260AD,if your going through something and need to talk to someone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c46e8aa7ce8,8BA8BA5260AD,The Facial Action Coding System would be a great thing to have in school because some kids are shy an dont like to talk and raise there hands in class infront of everyone and if you dont ask questions when you dont understand something that could cause you to fail the class all because of your shyness. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0708647c2983,8BA8BA5260AD,"Yes , the Facial Action Coding System is needed for schools and worth spending some money on for schools all over the world ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e662a0676e9,8BA8BA5260AD,them again we wouldnt need to invest in this if students spoke up about what they needed and whats going on ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c42957348261,8BA8BA5260AD,"but some students jus have a sad or mad face everyday for no reason so the Facial Action Coding Syestem may read their facial expressionand say that student is mad , when the student is just doing there normal face ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cf4cab2fe64e,8BA8BA5260AD,The school board or government shoudnt have to invest in the Facial Action Coding System if teachers take the time and talk to their students ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4a1de916310b,8BA8BA5260AD,some teachers are the reason the students become mad beause they make the students mad when they have to do too much homework or even class work ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78231bc75109,8BA8BA5260AD,it also is a better way for humans to connect with the computers as it says that in paragraph 1 ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0e44107c1471,8BA8BA5260AD,"
+To sum it all up this technology could come in handy in certain situations , the teachers might like it but the students might not , your boss may like it but you probably wouldnt . Its a win win situation for students it would tell others how your feeling and if you sad someone might talk to you to let you know your not alone , and for teachers its benificial because it could help you understand your students more. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+26cf8d3221ac,8BBA4BC818BA,Drivers shouldn't be able to use cell phones during driving ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2c396929eea,8BBA4BC818BA,Using your phone during driving can hurt many people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a59bd773d44,8BBA4BC818BA,cause people to get addicted and not pay attention to the road. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cafe12e50685,8BBA4BC818BA,"If drivers could use their phones while driving, they can harm people and cause accidents. If they're on their phone they would most likely not pay attention to the road. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a5788fc5d1be,8BBA4BC818BA,"They can hurt kids and cause road problems. They could even mess up their jobs focusing on their phone and not the objective. Devices can become over powering. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+541fb4d7449d,8BBA4BC818BA,"If drivers could use their phones, it could become addicting and cause problems ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b0e924ff37a,8BBA4BC818BA,They can get addicted to their phone and not pay attention. Devices get addicting and can do too much and can decrease focus. They can be going through a problem and not focus on their man goal. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42aac035fb8e,8BBA4BC818BA,"Drivers shouldn't be able to use cell phones during driving. They can cause accidents and harm people, and it can become addicting.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+79c429631785,8BBDEC4FD82E,"It said the cowboys played baseball,volleyball,table tennis tornaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games that help pass time so ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4ecb18470f7f,8BBDEC4FD82E,i think he was like showing people and telling people about its so fun ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4c4e6a55bea5,8BEA456945B0,I ''agree'' with the principal ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ad97564f30d,8BEA456945B0,",sometimes some of the struggle or dose of in the middle of class an lose train of thought. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4798f048a3bf,8BEA456945B0,What if some of the kids dont wanna do it or think that there not smart to try. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5b466485d16f,8BEA456945B0,Dont try to per pure them in to doing it thats not fair to them and the teachers that have to stay for it. Sometimes its more easier to just take a vote to see who wants to do it and who docent. Some kids might get tiered of the same thing over and over again so try to make it like every moth or every six weeks. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e202da16744b,8BEA456945B0,You dont wanna go to fast that you make every thing about the program make somethings about how it can help the students out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+256c1e44fd83,8BEA456945B0,"Help them out by saying you can get more home work done,provide snacks,there species,how to talk better,or write better theres all types of way you can help them. Your the principal and their the students you have to do your job as the adult and they will do there job as the student. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf259e73e9cd,8BEA456945B0,You should let them pick their extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa97ec5865e2,8BEA456945B0,"because just maybe they dont like it or they dont like the way someone teaches or some people in the class. Some of the kids might not have the ability to play a sport or take a pic'sand edit 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5835787a6b77,8BEA456945B0,"Sometimes students just wont to let off stress,self stem,anger the bulled up in side so the can work on that. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9be920f8188a,8BEA456945B0,Some student just wont people to be nice to other people in the school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f3f75012e8a,8BEA456945B0,"Witch means no bulling,no calling people bad names,dont make students feel like there not wanted. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13342d68e3cd,8BEA456945B0,See most of the students are not the same you know. So thats why you have to give them multiply choices to see what they like in the world. Thats why i agree with the pricable.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+367ad184aa49,8BFA8777316F,"Many school officials have been questioning whether or not students should participate in extracurricular activities. Extracurricular activities like sports, working on the yearbook, or serving in the student council can contribute a lot to a student's view on school. In addition to this, students will pay more attention to their grades and behavior. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+741bf75f37b7,8BFA8777316F,Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d9ee3357836,8BFA8777316F,it is a great way for them to learn new things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c6cd244e0ce,8BFA8777316F,get a break from learning all day ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8254cb386b1b,8BFA8777316F,get to socialize and make more friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56dfab3502f6,8BFA8777316F,"In school, many students dislike to learn new things. By having one extracurricular activity, students will have a great way of learning new things ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e9248662f555,8BFA8777316F,"Sports are something we usually do during gym class, but in gym class at our school we move fast through any unit that we do. Having at least one extracurricular activity will give students a chance to enjoy participating in sports that they like. Also students will get to learn more about this sport and even later on join a team. There are a lot of creative students at my school. Students who want to learn about photography, drawing, and constructing things will have a great opportunity to by joining a extracurricular activity that involves this. I would like to add on that when I joined a drawing club, I learned many new things like blending colors. Additionally, training on your mindset is very important. By having a extracurricular activity like chess or board games, students will get to learn how to play board games that they have been wanting to try. Learning new things from extracurricular activities could be very helpful to students because later on they might have a chance to use this information. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3f2c334440bc,8BFA8777316F,"Learning all day can be very hard on some students. By joining a extracurricular activity, students will be able to have a break from learning all day ",Claim,Effective,,,
+965493cddf69,8BFA8777316F,"Many students by the end of the day are very tired after learning for so long. By participating in an extracurricular activity students will clear their mindset. In addition to this, having a break from learning can make students feel more relieved and they will pay more attention during class. If students decide to join extracurricular activities like drawing, they will be able to calm down. It has been a proven fact that drawing will make you calm down, so by doing a extracurricular activity, students will be at ease and contribute more during class. Learning all day is very stressful and takes a lot of energy, so therefore students should participate in calm and relaxing extracurricular activities that will give them a break from school and at the same time help them pay more attention toward school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d9708cb49c38,8BFA8777316F,Socializing is something that some shy students struggle with. Extracurricular activities give students a chance to make more friends and socialize ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a6ee9765976a,8BFA8777316F,"As a shy person, when I first came to my school I was struggling to find some good friends that I could trust. Later on I decided to join a chess club and a drawing club and I made great friends. Joining a extracurricular activity can give shy students a way to to train on socializing, meaning that they could practice how to socialize and even overcome their fear of socializing by talking to people in their extracurricular activity. At school, some students who are not shy can be very loud and disruptive during class. If these students join a extracurricular activity, they will not want to socialize as much during class because they will have a extracurricular activity that they could join and talk and share their opinions there. Extracurricular activities are very helpful towards students who want to make some friends and socialize, so therefore making students participate in at least one is necessary. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+24d7ce0b25d6,8BFA8777316F,"Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity because it is very helpful for them. Students get to learn many new things and this might even help them chose their future career. Learning new things can be very tiring to some students and they might not even be able to handle so much information, so by joining a extracurricular activity students will get to have a break from school. To add on, students will will have the chance to socialize and make more friends. Learning can be very difficult for some students, but by participating in at least one extracurricular activity, students will be able to enjoy learning new things, get a break from learning all day, and will get to socialize and make more friends. Therefore students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity because this activity will help them with their school life and their grades. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d0ab266a6077,8C0D1A4261C0,"Work assigned over the summer is very much dreaded by students, but does that mean students should be the ones designing these assignments? A majority of schools assign summer assignments to ensure that students still receive an education during their time off from school ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ccb476690e5b,8C0D1A4261C0,"While there is much debate on whether the student should have the right to design these projects, the best option is for these projects to be teacher-designed. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3fa0137d114e,8C0D1A4261C0,Summer projects should be teacher-designed because it ensures that students will work efficiently ,Claim,Effective,,,
+da5abd786057,8C0D1A4261C0,"that the assignments will be safe and appropriate. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c14858aaad0f,8C0D1A4261C0,"Having set rules and requirements created by teachers, ensures that students will complete the tasks to a high level. During the summer, students would rather not have educational work to focus on, but projects created by the teacher enforces these students to do so. If these projects were student-designed, it could potentially allow them to finesse the system, and create a project that does not require much thinking and work. Student-designed projects also leaves room for error. Projects constructed by students leaves the door open for many mistakes, which will ultimately hurt the student in the end. This prevents students from working efficiently and fully understanding the topic they are working on. The goal of teacher-designed projects is to not control the students, but to make sure that the students are obtaining knowledge, understand the assignment, and are producing high quality work. Students may be confused or have numerous of questions with student-designed projects since there are no specific guidelines and rules, so having teacher-designed projects are ideal because they explicitly state what they are looking for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+21b1f5a449e2,8C0D1A4261C0,"If students had the ability to come up with their own projects, it gives them an opportunity to select a topic that could be unsafe or not school appropriate. This is especially important for science projects or English assignments. Giving students the power to choose their projects could be risky when it comes to these two subjects. For science projects, students could end up harming themselves with unsafe chemicals or substances because a lack of a rubric and criteria created by the teacher. For English assignments, students might choose controversial topics that are not appropriate for the school environment, but would not know due to a lack of strict guidelines. The possibility of projects being unsafe and inappropriate are not likely if they are designed by teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c47fb505c55,8C0D1A4261C0,"Some may argue that assignments should be student-designed because it allows the student to express themselves creatively through their work. By displaying their creativity and thought process, it makes the idea of having work over the summer more enjoyable. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+789f784ae049,8C0D1A4261C0,"However, having projects that are created by the student leaves room for interpretation, which could confuse students, and may take them in the wrong direction. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9fe6498be29e,8C0D1A4261C0,"In addition, some students may not be that creative, and cannot come up with a project on their own. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2516f955721e,8C0D1A4261C0,"Teacher-designed assignments still allow students to show what they know, but with stricter guidelines to ensure that quality work is being produced from the students. If students are allowed to design their own projects, it might result in an end product that does not meet the standard of work it should, especially since students would rather not complete work in the summer. Because of these issues and flaws, having student-design projects is not a wise choice. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8cbd49fc4edb,8C0D1A4261C0,"Having teacher-designed projects is the best option for both teachers and students because it guarantees that students are working hard to meet the requirements of the assignment, comprehending the topic of the project, and working on projects that are both safe and school appropriate. In order for schools to ensure that students continue learning during their break, the most effective project for students to work on, is one designed by teachers.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7c378ab8ca27,8C155B1DA8DD,I don't believe a technology can identify human emotions ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b02b1928fbfe,8C155B1DA8DD,Because I think we all fakes our smiles sometimes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+98ea3bacfd9f,8C155B1DA8DD,"let's say that I don't feel good or I am angry, but I don't anyone or anybody to know how I feel because I am pretty sure not everyone of us is always ready to let people know how they are feeling, we fake our smile and still smile but we don't really mean it, we smile out side but we feel like crying inside, and most of the time if you come out and say how you are feeling no one will notice it except if you tpld them yourself ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f05e5a22b6d6,8C155B1DA8DD,"a computer cannot tell whether a person is happy, sad, fear,angry. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+9811ff36332c,8C155B1DA8DD,"in the second paragraph it says that we or computer can ""calculate"" our emotions ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5e1899bbe778,8C155B1DA8DD,I still don't believe that can ever happen because we express how we feel we can't count our emotions. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d9842da400d0,8C155B1DA8DD,"""Hold on! can we actually ""calculate"" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer reconize the subtle facial movement we humans use to express how we feel?"" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91054cf37ba1,8C155B1DA8DD,"It's not true at all, there is no way a computer can tell me when I am happy and when I am not happy, maybe I am faking, maybe I don't even even want to show my feelings. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8091e4725474,8C438E75385D,In the article the author supports this idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+950fc77e24b6,8C438E75385D,explaning first how Venus is often referred to Earth's twin. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms to density and size ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c4f348a3d3f,8C438E75385D,"In the difference in seep mean that sometimes we are closer to, Mars and other times to Venus. The author says that on Venus surface, temperatures average over 800 deggrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f8acfe3663f,8C438E75385D,In the article the author says that Venus has the hottest temperatures of any planet in our solar system ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4fead2f17b39,8C438E75385D,"In Venus weather present additional impbnediments like for eripting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c37a5e1d664b,8C438E75385D,The author is putting examples of how imaging a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4a6cf28bf19b,8C438E75385D,Just for the jets airplane travel at a higher altitude to fly ovwer many storms or anything thats going on and see how things happen why they happen and is there a pattern an which way they happen. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60653fdd7959,8C438E75385D,But if it works than the researchers can not take samples of rocks and gas or anything else. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+49e3b3d5806d,8C438E75385D,Therefore the sicentists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get more closer up. NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. Anotherproject is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. the Author gives examples on how NASA is trying to study Venus.  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5293e20a195e,8C4ED47912C3,Heres something you might be interested in doing activities outside that you may have never wanted to do before. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6fdeef09bc24,8C4ED47912C3,yes you should do extracurriculars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+44c0d40f6900,8C4ED47912C3,"you could get out of the house more, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ac65cec227a,8C4ED47912C3,"do something that your really passoinate about and could maybe do that for a living when your older, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c031b213ed78,8C4ED47912C3,"you could try new things and expiernce things you havent expierenced before. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6212338c5f3,8C4ED47912C3,"You dont always have to be excersizing to be outside or doing something other than being in your house all day. When you get out of the house you think about things like walking the dof through the neighborhood, or dropping your kids off with thier friends somewhere but you never really think about other things you could be doing when your not busy. You could hands down take a long walk around the neighborhood matter fact you could even jog/run,You could pick up some trash around the neighborhood and watch the ecosystem and get out more. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e82d45a278e,8C4ED47912C3,So what im saying is if you find the right thing for you your out of the ball park. You have a chance to get away from the world and do what you love doing when your not doing school work or other things like that. You have a chance t be yourself without people judging everything little thing that goes on in your life. Plus if your really goos at it you could do your passion for a living whe your older like you could get a job that has something to do with something your really interested in and getting paid a little better than you would doing something thats not fun at all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a3525eec344,8C4ED47912C3,You could try things that you usually wouldnt try when you are staying at home playignvideo games and watching netflix in your room. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d54ceec7bc2,8C4ED47912C3,And maybe if you try the right thing you will really get into it and keep getting better at whatever your interested in. Sometimes your sitting at home bored because you dont spend enough time doing other things like for exam[ple you could go out side and do a couple laps around your house to get a little bit more energy out. All I can tell you is when you find something your interested in you will know it because your gonna want to do it 24/7. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76091be55335,8C4ED47912C3,I hope that you really take into consideration doing some extracurriculars. You would really like doing something your interested in instead of just sitting around at home ding absolutely nothing. Some people just take awhile to find what their interested in but when they find it they stick with it until the day they can't anymore. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5de4e2d18a81,8C55F83A618F,If people limited the use of cars the earth would be able to have enough time to clean its atmosphere ,Position,Adequate,,,
+342d6b9258e6,8C55F83A618F,"the only downside to this is that in cities buildings are farther away then they are like in passage 1 where as everything is in walking distance, but in cities that are meant for walking to different locations would cause a major problem with older adults ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a3890c536c26,8C55F83A618F,I do see this happening in small towns but cities would be more difficult to travel to unless they rebuilt everything within walking distance ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a2d31e29ed39,8C55F83A618F,Now if America's citizens are driving less each year then let it happen and in a few years come back to the data that is presented in passage 4 ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9cd8bce27ea6,8C55F83A618F,So basically let it all happen on its own and not have to force it like Paris has done with giving out fines for whoever is driving a car with odd numbered license plates on mondays and even on tuesdays. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+25a7a05eefb0,8C9A286F5351,"I have read the article of ''Unmasking the Face on Mars.'' When I imagine that if I were a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+1b22bcb11e6e,8C9A286F5351,"First of all,in September,1997,one of the chief scientist man said ''When they arrived at the Red Planet,''We felt this was important to taxpayer. A few days later NASA was unveiled the image for all to see.''Jim Garvin also say that ''We photographed the face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.'' Which mean they were trying to shot a picture of the
+
+Face that they saw in Mars. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+940e34e9a95c,8C9A286F5351,"Second,on April 5,1998,when Cydonia was for the first times,the two men had snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photo. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73f3ae9b5429,8C9A286F5351,It revealed a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. When the Face was located it was in April a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. One man said ''Alien markings were hidden by haze.'' ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca954f093632,8C9A286F5351,"After that,the mission trying to look again. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18c6cc3d2a3a,8C9A286F5351,"In April 8,2001 a cloudless summer a day in Cydonia,Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. Garvin said ''We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view.''Malin's team also captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.''The image of 2001 spans like 1.56 meters,compared to 43 meters in the best of 1976 Viking's photo.
+
+Finally,Garvin said that ''If there were objects in this pictures like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were.''he said. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76f4a1313b9d,8C9A286F5351,"Lastly,the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American Wests ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db4277c91bd9,8C9A286F5351,'That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.' ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f74498021cf2,8C9A286F5351,'After all that happened nobody was not really sure which one was the right one. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1e272584d6af,8CD442C14869,arguing wheater use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuble? Yes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0762a6448b8a,8CD442C14869,"the article say. "" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00e36eafcc9c,8CD442C14869,Using this tecnology is valuable because anatomy to allowed them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. to how it's going to work on the compter. It's valuable because it can tell how Mona Lisa demontrates is really intended to bring a smile. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce7168bc168b,8CD442C14869,"The muscled called?
+
+Orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crows-feet around your eyes. That means how the face muscles. It work and whats it called to get ride of these thing's. Before hand, it make the false smile, the mouth streched sideways using the zygosmtic major and a diffrent muscle . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d23f8e59c9d2,8CD442C14869,"according to the reading in paragraph 7 while looking in the mirror rise your lips at. The corners of your mouth is decribing you reaction to your face. Then squint your eyes slightly to produced wrinkling, Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks of your cheeck up, torward you eyes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f65548a19375,8CD442C14869,"Conclusion states that people have beautful everything around them! Not to mention, while looking in the mirrow process can make you a good pro at expressing your emtions. secdonly, muscles it's an expert, faces don't lie. These muscles clues are somtimes used to spot when smiling. Politiian or celebritu isn't being truthful. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4b586035d0d2,8D4A0D4CD2C2,it could just be a rock formation and that the sun was shining on the rock in just the way that it looked like a face. Also who knows we could have just been in the right place at the right time ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c396bb35bd40,8D4A0D4CD2C2,"I know for a fact that this is a monument made by aliens because no astronaut has gone to mars yet. Who would of made this if no one was there, I know that there is no way for you to prove to me that this was not made by aliens."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0bd87a653afc,8D4A0D4CD2C2,"It was made by natural formation."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+748d373881b0,8D4A0D4CD2C2,"what about this it was made by the rover running over rocks and they tumbled to make the face like appearence."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+71934a0394ab,8D4A0D4CD2C2,It was made of a lava dome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5dc9e5abc4e1,8D4DEA77D545,"Venus is ideal for humaninty, if Earth became not ideal for humaninty anymore. The previous article about Venus "" The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" is a good article to read, because it describes Venus and it's dangers and it's benfits. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+64952ef26a58,8D4DEA77D545,"It may be mistaken that it is unhabitable for humanity, but there is a possiblity for humanity to live on other planet. There is reasons for saying those things about Venus. This is an other aticle to explain why Venus is habitable for humanity. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+af5d36dda99b,8D4DEA77D545,"""Venus is often referred to as Earth's twin"" Paragraph 2, is perfect arguement to start with, because as you can see venus is already considered as twin of Earth. It's natural geographic is similar to Earth's, so it already proves Venus could had a possibility of having oceans, lake, and bodies of water in the past. The density and size is same to Earth too so we will have vaguely same space as Earth. Venus is too hot to survive so we can do blimp-like vehicle above venus and still stay in their gravity and have people survive in the atmosphere above the fray. We could send people over there to research first before doing anything, If they makes people feels safer about living on Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f0a242b2007,8D4DEA77D545,"There is reason for saying those things about Venus, the reason for saying those things are that we are currently overpopulating Earth we currently have over 7 Billion people living. We need more room for more people in the future and im concered if we dont move to other planet, Earth will be crowded. It already is crowded in some areas of Earth, like New York, California, New Delhi, and more. ""Our travels on earth and beyond should be not limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edge of imagination and innovation."" Is a good statment to make to encourage people to explore Venus more. There is some people who hope that we will move to other planet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+771b85903e40,8D509BBA7DD5,Touchdown! I just won the biggest game of the year. My team run on the field and we jump up and down in joy. This would not have happened if my principal did not make us take a school activity. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+ccfbcc2c4a84,8D509BBA7DD5,I think that it is a good idea to make us take a school extracurricular activity. ,Position,Effective,,,
+ad1db05cdf30,8D509BBA7DD5,it will help kids brain develop faster and it will make smarter ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa84489a50e7,8D509BBA7DD5,it helps you on working as a team if you are doing a extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab68b9a4399b,8D509BBA7DD5,if you don't plays any sports you will get lazy and you will not have any energy to do stuff with your friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fac7b5a68b2,8D509BBA7DD5,It will help you on your leader ship skills the most ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+161bf3dcdb6e,8D509BBA7DD5,You never know you might like something you never tried out before. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99d7ecadd624,8D509BBA7DD5,Next you get to make new friends when you are taking a extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b06ee1b206f3,8D509BBA7DD5,"Some kids are to scared to play any sports or join in a school activity, because they are shy to talk to people. After all you get to have a lot of fun playing with your friends after school. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d18ccd3a0bf,8D509BBA7DD5,"it gives you a break form school, you are setting down most of the day doing work for school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+426194839ca9,8D509BBA7DD5,When you play sports it helps you take your mind off of work and gives you brain a break. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc2aed7cbb4f,8D509BBA7DD5,"Next say you move on the first day you don't know anybody, a school activity help you know new kids. After the school year is over the kids will have something to do over the summer, because they know all of these kid from school activities ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bcf00f7d21b,8D509BBA7DD5,it will help kid from getting fat ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0998a0ed4c26,8D509BBA7DD5,the more kids play sport the least likely kids will be leaving school fat. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ef682441533,8D509BBA7DD5,it will open up kid to have fun in school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+550d5561dd05,8D509BBA7DD5,it take away kids from school and help them learned in a better way. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3836189e872,8D509BBA7DD5,"Kids do not leaned by placing them in a room for eight hour a day for all most 1/4 of there lives. We learned more by doing school activities, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83d7eb29ad7d,8D509BBA7DD5,"it makes better kids, it make smarter kid, it helps kid learned. That is why I think that each school should have kids doing at least one school activity.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cb14123dfa94,8D6EE82E31D0,"After reading the article called, ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"". And about how there is a machine that can actually read peoples emotions and put their emotions into percentages. And how they used it to find out how the Mona Lisa was feling when she was painted i think that is truly amazing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6501badff737,8D6EE82E31D0,i think that we should use this technology at school to read the students emotions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5592ae6a3585,8D6EE82E31D0,"I think its a great idea to use for school, so teachers can tell how the student is feeling and can find a way to help them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac73069658cb,8D6EE82E31D0,"In paragraph 6 the author uses the exmple of how we could use this new technology during school for example he wrote, ""If you smile when a web ad appears on you screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, th next ad might be different."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cf027b0da51b,8D6EE82E31D0,And instead of ads they could be explanations on how to do a problem. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a7de16ab162,8D6EE82E31D0,"I think that that would inprove the students learning. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+402596a4d36f,8D6EE82E31D0,In conclusion i think that we should use this new techonoly to our aventage and use it in the classrooms so we can tell which students need help and which one doesn't. That way we can help them. They might even learn even more. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+23185a538f48,8DA0B80420FC,"some schools believe that students should be given projects over the summer to assure they learn, should theses projects be teacher or student designed? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+73e987a33cc4,8DA0B80420FC,although teachers can make sure students doing what they need, I personally believe that it should be student ,Position,Effective,,
+96293db327dc,8DA0B80420FC,students can make it more a peeling  ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c20ff57bd4ad,8DA0B80420FC,it helps builds creative students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+298c93704997,8DA0B80420FC,shows your city you are getting your youth involved. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87e94b143e49,8DA0B80420FC,"who better to make a project to keep students attention the the students themselves. Because while students are on break many do not have people to push them and make sure they are doing their work so it has to be a project that they would want to do on their own. and if a blunder is made the student can't say they didn't understand because the students designed the projects. This will be a way to grab the attention of whoever grades the project, like a hook in a essay. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b95bc55d1b52,8DA0B80420FC,"Yes schools are a place of learning, but while students are in school they are building creative thoughts that are just waiting to be used. giving the students the chance to design their summer summer project helps give the schools notice of what future creator you are putting into the world. If the students are creating their own summer project it teaches then about Independence, and that they don't need a teacher standing over top of them to do their work. With student designing their own project it will make great business skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1a8dc3b3d2c2,8DA0B80420FC,"After all the students in our school system now are our future town council, school bored leaders, and teachers. so I'm sure the school bored would be pleased to hear that while students are going on their summer break they are not only doing but designing their summer project. Students after the summer can come to tell the public about there how designing their own project helps them in independence and self learning. Although many students may not care for it it will help them keep what they learn and learn new thing researching and designing their summer project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+937384cb95f0,8DA0B80420FC,"although although teachers can make sure students are doing what they need; I personally believe that it should be student designing the summer project. And students can make it more a peeling to one another, it helps builds creative students, and shows your city you are getting your youth involved are just three of many reason. This is why I believe that students are the ones that should design the summer project. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ce46e1fd2834,8DECBFDC0EB8,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the authors support to his knowledge of Venus is very informative. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+79c8d31c6e0c,8DECBFDC0EB8,"In the article the author provides information about the planet to inform the reader that even though it may be hard and risky that it'd be outstanding to be able to put humans on the planet, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8dbd80e2e86b,8DECBFDC0EB8,"but because of it's ""thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide"" or blazin temperatures no space craft or human are able to last on the planet without getting crushed or burned to crisps. Venus atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than what us humans and living things experience on earth making it impossible for someone to last on the planet, with all of its cons many would rather admire from a view but some would rather get closer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cd6aa20dafb,8DECBFDC0EB8,The evidence from the article that would make you want to avoid venus as much as it may seem nice and plesent the information provided would make you not want to put a foot on the ground of Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc964a43b528,8DECBFDC0EB8,"In the article it states that the planets weather consists of ""erupting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning stikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface"" not hospitable for any space craft nor human life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bbbbccf94054,8DECBFDC0EB8,"Astronomers believe venus to have been ""covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" According the the knowledge of the article ""the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters"" stateting that Venus and Earth are and where once similar at a point in time ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07d1e974d9e7,8DECBFDC0EB8,"NASA believed to be coming up with multiple ways for humans to set foot on the planet without any complications, at the moment NASA's only way of getting near the planet with stable temperatures and pressure is by having a ""blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99b572ab3c95,8DECBFDC0EB8,In conclusion the author puts into words that visiting Venus by foot seems impossible but by the rate of the technology and people willing to help with making it happen setting foot on Venus will be sooner than many believe. In the future humans will finally reach the land of Venus but in the mean time many more features about the planet are yet to be seen and uncovered. The space craft can only provide so much information from a distance that with better technology a space craft may be able to get closer to the planet for more indetailed information. As far as that is it's closer than you'd think and the author's information and details of the planet in the article are very ear listening for any reader looking for information of the planet. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aa5ce39ad4b1,8EB905FB00AD,So you think that the land formation coincedentally 'a face' created by the weathering. Proves to be a significant amount of source to say there were aliens or a civilation ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4e67799fac28,8EB905FB00AD,"One thing will not prove anything there are no signs of homes or even indented marks of other species being there only this simple marking. Well i beg to plead the opposing side see what you have seen from 1976,1998, and 2001 is technology has proccesed this and its clearly nothing but a mark. Your conspiracy will live on if this was a life form why would it only be one life form? where are the others there are no trace of them a form of life can not just be created by nothing it has to reproduce. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+930c2d9e6e47,8EB905FB00AD,"There is only sign of one so there for it does not exist as of the evidence given it is simply just a mesa, a mesa is a rock formation. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+615e41d7dbe2,8EB905FB00AD,this is just a coincedence that it looks of so nasa revealed they wish there was life form to give us more to study of but not much evidence comes from a plain old rock that looks like a face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6542ce7d974,8EB905FB00AD,"in conclusion you personally will not change your mind about this becuase it a conspiracy life has been held up by this making money off of this rejoicing of nothing but a rock. Just like area 51 another conspiracy theorys where there is claimed to be unexposed life form when really its just a testing site for us millitary. Also the illumanati claimed to be the ones running the music industry and society. there many conspiracy theorys, but maybe just maybe theyare controlling us of what they dont want us to know making people think the conspiracys are a joke when in reality they are true. Iastly nothing can come off a rock as i said its a natural formation a rock to be 'told'. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+92097cfb8417,8EF7C2316736,"Summer is like a brainwash. Students seem to forget everything they learned in school that year over the summer. To try and combat this, many teachers assign summer projects so the students don't fall behind on any of their learning. Students are often upset by this, wanting their summer to be fun and stress free. Teacher designed projects are often long and tedious making them boring to do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f769a4cf68f2,8EF7C2316736,The summer projects should be student-designed. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b7b42dee26b2,8EF7C2316736,Having the projects be student-designed allows for a greater range of creativity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+572f6aca07a5,8EF7C2316736,"more control over how the project is completed, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+29831274a417,8EF7C2316736,creates a better mindset for disgruntled students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2fd673e5a60,8EF7C2316736,"
+Allowing for summer projects to be student designed makes for a greater range of creativity ",Claim,Effective,,,
+67ddb695df3c,8EF7C2316736,"A greater range of creativity would encite students to finish their projects faster if they were given a wider range of mediums to work with instead of just paper and pencil, or a computer program. Even when it's not over the summer, being assigned a project where I can make a poster or create a diorama instead of writing a paper is already much more exciting to me because I'm given a bunch of different mediums to work with. I personally prefer creating something big and artsy to sitting down and churning out a paper within a set time frame. The process of creating something huge feel much more satisfying because I can visibly see when I am done. Completing a paper still has a feeling of satisfaction but the overall feeling is dulled because no creativity was released. A greater range of creativity also allows for a much more interesting presentation. A differentation of styles in projects makes the overall project much more interesting and increases the chances of students paying attention for longer during those presentations. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b78082c6fe61,8EF7C2316736,Completion of the project is thought to be most important. Allowing students to control how the project is completed is much more student oriented ,Claim,Effective,,,
+055da7ab3216,8EF7C2316736,"A student oriented project should be more fun and less stressful as to not add anything more on top of an already heavy workload. Letting students decide how the project is presented and what the rubric should entail makes the students not only happier, but less stressed as a result. If the students can control what they want to do in the project or how the final product should be, it could help immensely with the overall students happiness and create a stronger student community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ccccc7cfbc5f,8EF7C2316736,"The mindset for summer is just fun, fun, fun. Adding a summer project dampens that mindset. It becomes a burden for students to deal with. No one wants to do schoolwork over the summer, summer is the time for fun! Allowing students to create a student designed project would create an overall better mindset towards how summer project are viewed. I know that I don't want to do school work over the summer. Giant math packets, books to read, papers to write, it's all so tedious and I always end up pushing it off til August, where I'm then rushing to get it all done in time for the start of school. If I were to be given a project that I could control, it would already seem so much better because I would be in full control over what I did for the project or how I approached a problem I encountered with it. It's important to keep a healthy mindset in school so you don't burn yourself out ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b471655f228,8EF7C2316736,Summer is seen as a time to destress and have fun and creating a better mindset towards student project by making them student designed is extremely crucial to that. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6f0858885273,8EF7C2316736,"When I think of school projects, I think of teachers handing them out at the end of a quarter or towards the end of school to be completed over the summer. Projects are a way to either boost or bring down your grade, depending on how you do. Because of that effect on grades, important projects tend to stress students out. When students are given more control over a project it immediately takes stress off the student because they automatically control how their project is made and presented. Teacher designed projects are made to showcase how well teachers teach their students. If more students get a higher grade on a project, the credibility of that teacher goes up. They are viewed as a better teacher overall. While teacher designed projects might have more academic results, having projects be student-designed creates a wider range of creativity, control over how the project is executed, and makes a more postive mindset for students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e0ef705e3f22,8F33151F0334,He joined the programe for many reasons to help familys out with yard work and things like that when the husbands and fathes were at war. Also he helped with grocery stores and lots of bisnesses and he helped countrys recover food. He said it was an opertunity of a lift time to do this. He helped a lady at a farm all by her self. He went on a ship to go other places and help and on board he found some time to be him and just have fun. On lukes second trip he served watch men. He was to check on all of the animals and it was rainy out and he sliped and fell down very wet steps he almost slid out of the boat but a lucky peace of meatal beam was there and he stop right before he went out of an open side of the boat. but this put him on medical leave so he couldent work so I bet he was a little upset that he couldent help on the boat or where ever they stoped to help on land. He had fun with table tennis tournements fencing boxing reaidin and whittling the games he played helped pass time on the bout and just relaxe for a wile and have some fun. He said being a seagoing was much more than an adventure for luke boberger. He is greatful for this oppertunity he says and made it more aware to people in other countrys that that had food and nice people to give it to them. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1204e89903b8,8F4907E2D511,I am against this topic ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ed68769d3c2,8F4907E2D511,I think it will distract the students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa3037554dcb,8F4907E2D511,"I say this, because they will be trying to change their emotiones to get diffrent things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c1e07e19daf,8F4907E2D511,I think it violates their privacy and other things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3c850e2268a,8F4907E2D511,Now days it tis not hard to hack into a computor and take pictures of the person on the other side. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee799328b7f3,8F4907E2D511,This FACS thing will probaly encourage the person to hack into a computor and change the pop ups or the emotions based of the other persons emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e975dca72281,8F4907E2D511,"It could lead to people making the computor say special things to make a person happy about themselves, but it could lead to them talking the other person to meet them outside school. What is your thoughts? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65058da73bff,8F4907E2D511,"I am strongly against this topic, because if I was a parent I would not want my kid using this product. I say this, because there are a lot of creepy, crazy, and a stalker ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+235ecbb965ee,8F4907E2D511,"It could be used to lead the child to do a surtain thing. The pop ups chould lead the child to see or do bad things. The pop up could be changed by a hacker if they want. They could tell them to do drugs or drink under age. This is all bad for a kid. I would never want my kid to do any of that if I was a parent. I would never want my kid if they were old enough to drive and get drawn into drinking by a pop up ad and then kill someone, because they where drinking and driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95995963e666,8F4907E2D511,Another reason I am against this is for the teachers side of things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+596eba685ca3,8F4907E2D511,"Say you where a teacher and had FACS on the computor and all your students where changing their emotions to get diffrent pop ups. There your students are destracted and are not listening to your lecture or lesson for the day. Then you have to stop class and get onto the students. Then you may have a kid tell his mom or dad you yelled and told the class to stop goofing around. With their emotions. Then they call the school and you then have to go to a meeting about what happened. Then you will have to try not to get into trouble by the state or you head leader. This could cause a lot of disruptions in the class and they will not get the education that they are there for. I am not saying that there is not already a lot of destractions alreadyby phones, talking, and chromebooks. It is not going to be as bad as emotion based pop ups. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35ba500f6989,8F4907E2D511,For the muscle and painting part of the passage. I think it had no relavents to the main idea of emotion based pop ups ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+40f8d5f3af6f,8F4907E2D511,"Back then when the Mona Lisa was painted they didn't have computors or advanced technology. It could of been stated a little bit diffrent. Like"" Mona Lisa never rarly smiled, but now as technology advanced and we now know that muscles change our facial emotions."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d36125d0cc9,8F4907E2D511,It then could help the scientific side of the FACS. Like now we know that your muscles help you change facial emotions. This then could help us then have more emotion based pop ups ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbd0b1c3f3a6,8F4907E2D511,"This may sound like I am for they FACS, but I not for it. It is a vilation of privacy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5f8edcc50a1,8F4907E2D511,What if the kid is having very bad thought like death or harm. Which is a very bad thing in teens today. This could lead to those bad pop ups again. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8dd8e958b2e9,8F4907E2D511,"All in all I thing this FACS should be outlawed in the U.S. and other countrys. I thing it could be used in a bad way. If I was a parent I would never ever let my kid use this FACS. I thing it coul sway my kids thinging and ideas. Also it would affect why they are at school. I sent them to school for an education, so they can get a could job. If I was a parent I would never want to see my kid on the crime life. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d1555fcd0ac2,8F55A0B21609,I think people shouldn't be able to use their phone in any capacity while operating a vehicle. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+65b8fe00a5e5,8F55A0B21609,"My first reason is that it can cause people to either harm themselves or others who are in the vehicle with them or, the person whose car they come in impact with while on their phone while operating a vehicle. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+77db08b9ede5,8F55A0B21609,"Second reason is because due to the lack of concentration while driving being the phone while operating on a moving vehicle is one of the main causes of most wrecks in the United States, which is the leading cause to distraction in a car is a cell phone. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+32bc3d35ccb6,8F55A0B21609,"""Resources show that according to The National Safety Council that 1.2 million car crashes in 2013 involved drivers talking on the phone and at least 341,000 involved in text messaging."" Also talking on the phone while driving is becoming more and more life threatening when multitasking behind the wheel of an operated vehicle. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35a735a6f770,8F55A0B21609,Everyday there's always someone whose severely injured or either worst end up dead because of the use of using their phone while operating a vehicle of any kind. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+585465eff7f4,8F55A0B21609,"I truly believe that using a phone while driving shouldn't be allowed, because for safety the driver needs to be more cautious for their life and the other person who is in another car that the driver who wants to be on the phone while driving comes in impact with all because they refuse to wait until they get to the destination that they are going. I know some opponents whose work is literally dependent on the use of a cell phone every single day such as people like lawyers entrepreneur's and business men believe that they have to always be available to answer the phone at all cost just to make sure their business or cast is still running smoothly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23bce268126a,8F55A0B21609,"Some people believe that using a phone while driving isn't the reason wrecks happened. Some say the cause comes from people who get too into whatever they're looking at or they get too occupied with the conversation with the other person that's on the other end of the phone.
+
+Which makes them take their attention of the road which leads to people not seeing a vehicle pulling out in front of them and then they rear end each other. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a5a777428894,8F55A0B21609,"As I said before I believe that people shouldn't use their phones while driving, but if you look at it from another person's point of view you start to wonder if like what if the person is a person who is sick and needs to be checked on every now and then, or someone who has to have assistance on something. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b119a302e71b,8F55A0B21609,When people think of safety they think of like seatbelts and driving and they don't think that having their phone in their possession while driving might doesn't seem like it would cause a lot of damage but it truly does ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23d170fc9956,8F55A0B21609,"because of the higher risk of impact on a person's car from not paying any attention to the stoplights, stop signs, speed limits, or the caution lights between a four way stop. In my opinion I believe that some people could use their phone while driving and still have their focus on the roads and cars beside them or in front of them and don't cause any wrecks, but then again I still believe phones shouldn't be used while driving just for safe benefits. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d0d3640b897,8F55A0B21609,People who don't use a phone while operating a vehicle have a greater change of living than a person who is paying no attention to the road and cars near them because their focus is on their phone. You're most likely to survive when you're worried about your phone and getting into wrecks because your man focus is on the roads and cars next to and in front of you. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b01b7d2e2065,8F7D96205308,"People should agree that the face on Mars was probably an accident. The face probably was not a face, it could have been another Martian mesa. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+79baf7bdbf88,8F7D96205308,"A rock os some type could have hit it or a meteor could also. Next, NASA took pictures of it, and NASA was researching it and studying it, so they can get more information on it. After studying it, they took a picture of it, and they engaged the public with it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea12c9600459,8F7D96205308,"People started to have debates about the picture and what it could have ment. ""Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence pof life on Mars."" The others are trying to protect it so NASA could be a little bit safer. The picture did look like an Egyptian Pharaoh ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d0e33fe9e975,8F7D96205308,"NASA said it was a ""huge rock information"" because it is very similar to a human's face. Next, you cannot just asumed the planet was made from aliens because there is a human's face on it. You got to study the artifact before you can assume it is from aliens. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3f429086dc7e,8F7D96205308,"After that, you got to be able to back up your answer , and saying why it is not a face. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eeb22edd43a4,8F7D96205308,"""Thousands of anxious web sufers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL website, revealing a natural landform."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa7c13c0149e,8F7D96205308,"People can asume it is a human's face because it look likes it. Another thing is that there is human's face on it, can mean life on the planet, Mars. Also the rock or the artifact does have an Egyptian Pharoah, it could mean a human was at one point up there. It probably is possible to have civilization on Mars. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8c8f5b23b394,8F7D96205308,"In conclusion, the artifact could have just been hit by a rock. People need to belive most things that are not really true. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+63a2f2e9a508,8F8E1AECFE27,So there was a time when Luke signed up to be a sea cowboy because he said it was an opportunity of a lifetime to do this journy. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+dfc97ec54db8,8F8E1AECFE27,So if join this program than you will have the time of your life and you will probly will do the same things Luke did. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f11a76dd7670,8F8E1AECFE27,Luke did many things like playing games with his friend or explore a little because when Luke did this he injoyed this journy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb8d623f565d,8F8E1AECFE27,"So Luke went on a journy with his friend and there was 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed the horses. Luke was going to Greece. By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. Luke had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. Lukes favriot thing was seeing the Acropolis in Greece. Luke also took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. Luke had a lot of work like clean the stables feed the horses two or three times a day. Luke also found time to have fun on borad, especiallyon the return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. The world opened up for Luke. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d71faed3f0b9,8F8E1AECFE27,"
+So if you join this program you will have the time of your lives. You will get to visit diffrent places and see diffrent things like everything that Luke saw on his journy. You will get to play all types of diffrent games like every single game that Luke played with all the other cowboys. So if you join the world will open up to you like it opened up for Luke ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e054ece963bc,8FF749312D49,"Venus sometimes is called the ""Evenning Star."" Its one of the highest points of light on the sky. Venus is actually a planet and not a star. Venus is the closeest planet to earth such as its density, size, and sometimes distance too. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f59777219aa7,8FF749312D49,The author states that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+15c9a83bcdd9,8FF749312D49,"One of the things that Venus is dangerous becasue of its thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets the planet. The danger of this is that the clouds are made up of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The acid can nearly kill you if there is a little bit touching you in any shape or form. Otherwise, Earth surface is on a average of over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times that what we have on our planet. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a1cbe2b461f8,8FF749312D49,"In conclusion Venus is very dangerous for any kind to be on, such as animals or humans. Although the plant is pretty hot its not good to be on it.          ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1eb4de44caca,8FFBD4C432B4,"Car Usage is more in U.S. because of transports,jobs,moving from one place to other,etc. We should use the cars but carefully because it can occur an accidents. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+22c45536be02,8FFBD4C432B4,We should reduce the use of car ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9ca0bea0524e,8FFBD4C432B4,Nowadays there are so many collisions occurs on highway roads in U.S. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f407f55804e,8FFBD4C432B4,save a lot of money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fef90dd8e570,8FFBD4C432B4,reduce the pollution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5aed4601ead2,8FFBD4C432B4,There are Multiple resources to support the idea to reduce the cars use and to save money. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71cb4f191637,8FFBD4C432B4,"""
+
+In German suburb,Life goes on without cars
+
+""
+
+,by
+
+Elisabeth
+
+Rosenthal ,From the
+
+New York Times ,It examines that,""70 percent of vauban's Families in Germany do not own the cars,and 57 percent sold a car to move here"".
+
+Heidrun Walter said that,""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"". A media trainer and mother of two,as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor. Vauban's streets are completely ""car-free"". Car Ownership was allowed,but there are only two places to park-Large garages at the edge of the development,where a car-owner buys a space,for
+
+$40,000 ,along with a home. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b8f5910b0b5d,8FFBD4C432B4,"In
+
+""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota""
+
+,by
+
+Andrew selsky ,It states that In BOGOTA,Colombia,""It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day without  cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines"". It also examines that the turnout was large,despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on bogota.""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,""said businessman
+
+Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two seat bicycle with his wife. The without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in bogota in the mid-1990s.
+
+In
+
+""Paris bans driving due to smog""
+
+,by
+
+Robert Duffer ,examines that,""Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city"". On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro($31).the same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day. Diesel fuel was blamed,since France has...[a]tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in france,compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe,according to reuters. Paris typically has more smog than othe european capitals. The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+877213719655,8FFBD4C432B4,Reduced of car usage can save money and reduce pollution. Limiting of car usage is great idea. The resources above tells about how was the life of other countries without car. The Resouces above have proved that reduce in car use can save a lot things for life.                 ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+30fab4750f1d,90212225F733,"Research indicates that students forget almost one-third of what they learned during the school year over summer. Without consistent reinforcement of learned material over the summer, students lose essential knowledge about concepts that are going to be built upon in the next school year. In response to that, schools have started to require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break to prevent minimal loss of information. These projects will allow students to retain knowledge and learn over the break so they are prepared for the next school year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+964e817abbfd,90212225F733,The summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb2fcc667f48,90212225F733,"teachers are knowledgable about the information students need to learn, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66d7a8043532,90212225F733,"student-designed projects may lead them to do the project incorrectly, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b054b5820e9,90212225F733,students may not make their summer projects challenging enough to learn new concepts. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abdbc47def9b,90212225F733,Teachers are educated in their field of study and pass that knowledge to their students, they are aware of the information and requirements for students to know for the next school year. ,Claim,Effective,,
+63f16a2a6946,90212225F733,"By having teachers design the summer projects, they can readdress concepts that students need practice with or struggled with last school year so they will not be troubled by it in the future. For example, in the book
+
+Counting By 7s , the main character excells at history. Although she excells in that subject, she has trouble with other subjects. A teacher-designed summer project for her may be focused on math and writing while her student-designed project would have been based on history, which may help her retain that knowledge, but does not help her with subjects she truly needs practice with. In addition, teacher-designed summer projects can have students learn new material that will be used in the upcoming school year. Teachers are aware of what will be taught in a course next whereas students are not. These summer projects would allow students to prepare ahead of time for the school year by reaffirming previous knowledge and learning new information directed towards the course. Many educational resources are only for teacher use or are not accessible to students prior to the school year, such as syallbuses and requirements for a course, Khan Academy, and other study sites, allowing teachers to be more effective in designing summer projects than students. Having the summer to complete teacher-designed summer projects will allow students to expand their knowledge on topics they need to learn or struggled with so they are prepared for the coming school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+26a33cad3285,90212225F733,"If students were to design summer projects, they may be unintentionally flawed or incorrect because the students are not experts on the subject like teachers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9bb572f71779,90212225F733,"Student-designed summer projects may allow students to express their creativity, but can ultimately lead them to learn the information incorrectly. Teachers are guides and resources for students to follow when learning information and asking questions. Frederick Douglass, a slave in the 1800s, became self-educated by looking at other students' papers and reading magazines and books. Although he helped himself become more knowledgable about the world through the new information he obtained, he learned some information wrong because he was not guided or corrected by teachers. Student-designed projects can be precarious because teachers cannot correct students if the project is designed inccorectly. If the project were teacher-designed, then the correct information will be present and learned by the students. The summer projects being flawed can also hurt students. By learning the information incorrectly, they are likely to repeat the same mistakes, making it harder to correct them. In the book
+
+Fish in a Tree , a girl with dyslexia struggled with writing because the words kept moving. She got into the habit of writing letters a specific way so that when a teacher noticed and corrected her, it was hard for her to stop the habit of writing letters incorrectly. Student-designed projects can give students the freedom to express their creativity through learning and designing, but this also allows for students to do their project incorrectly because they learned the material wrong, leading them to repeat the same mistakes because the teacher is not aware of how the students are designing their projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8958f0ecf50f,90212225F733,"Summer is the period of relaxation and taking a break from school for students. Giving the freedom of designing summer projects to students allows them to make the project easy to complete, preventing them from challenging themselves and learning new information through exploration of the project. Students can manipulate student-designed summer projects by creating a project that is not difficult to do, therefore not pushing or challenging them to learn new information. One example of this was demonstrated by a study of a homeschooled family in the Midwest. The parents gave their children the freedom of designing their own cirriculum for education based on their interests. Instead of centering their cirriculum and challenging themselves with subjects like algebra or chemistry, they studied games and did not necessarily learn anything. By having teacher-designed projects, teachers can challenge the students so they learn the new information about subjects for the coming year, which fulfills the requirements of learning over the break ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1231139d6f41,90212225F733,Teacher-designed projects would challenge students to learn while student-designed projects can be made easy for the student to complete. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4db8f95be4d4,90212225F733,"Teacher-designed summer projects can prepare students for the coming year by addressing upcoming subbjects and topics students have previously struggled with. In addition, it prevents students from learning information wrong or doing the project incorrectly by giving them specific guidelines. These projects also ensures that students are challenged and learn new information. Teacher-designed summer projects would be more beneficial for students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9d0a7e4365a3,902A59ECB525,I think the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4665ecb9720a,902A59ECB525,The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) can prove how a person is feeling due to having a 3-D computer model ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+88f902cfc60b,902A59ECB525,an electronic code ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1151da12087e,902A59ECB525,and a facial software ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+277cfde7a5cc,902A59ECB525,"First, the FACS has a 3-D computer model to help it figure out a persons emotion. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+17915f6797dd,902A59ECB525,"In the text it says, ""all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a humans muscles."" This evidence shows that a humans facial muscles shows how a person is feeling and each emotion has their own charateristics. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca26d99a62e7,902A59ECB525,"Second, the FACS also has an electronic code which helps the system understand better the emotion ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+833d355e3dc0,902A59ECB525,"just kanda how us as humans can tell if our friend is upset or happy. For example in the text it says, ""His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code."" This evidence shows that the software has the same kind of thing that lets us humans know how our friend is feeling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38f0b8fa10d6,902A59ECB525,"Lastly, the facial software helps FACS by using human features on the face understand the emotions ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8ca173f0c070,902A59ECB525,"In the article it says, ""muscles called orbicularis oculi palpabraeus makes crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius."" This evidence shows that even a computer software can tell what you're feeling by your face features. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+032dc7e2ceb6,902A59ECB525,"I think the FACS should be used to read the emotion expressions of students in a classroom. Having a 3-D computer model, an electonic code, and a facial software sure can all help Facial Action Coding System recongize a humans emotion. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3db4380c1016,90345B5B064D,"Imagine. Summer is here, and the dreadful school year is finally over. You're prepared to grab your swimsuits and go to the beach and actually enjoy your time off from learning. However, your blissful period is interrupted with anguishing agony as you realize you were assigned a summer project to complete. We've all been there, mourning over the fact that we received one more assignment to do for school. We are reluctant to start the projects as they seem pointless and a form of busywork for us; however, summer projects are designed to assure continuous learning through engaging tasks. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+62f475a4003c,90345B5B064D,"Although teacher-designed projects can be seen as desirable, summer projects should be student-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+2dda207ca4c9,90345B5B064D,as it helps foster creativity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9a53b2f2474,90345B5B064D,self-reliance. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e25b62ca0d1a,90345B5B064D,One reason why summer projects should be student-designed is the fact that it fosters creativity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c9c5bc8a273,90345B5B064D,"Giving students the freedom to learn about topics that interests them far outweighs the notion of just finishing an assignment. In my high school experience, I tend to remember projects that I was truly interested in, rather than the monotonous ones designed by teachers (that solely get work out of you). Projects are meant to be engaging, so that later down in life you can recall the learning experience. This difference proves that creative work fosters quality rather than quantity. Furthermore, a teacher-designed project inhibits a student's potential to express their creative mindset. By receiving a topic and a guideline on how one should complete a project, a student becomes mentally set on pursuing that one path, disregarding all other options. This mental block of creativity can be harmful to a growing teenager as the advancement of society is dependent on creative thinkers which student-designed projects help create. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5ac7676f0efe,90345B5B064D,Another reason why summer projects should be student-designed is the fact that it engages students to be self-reliant. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+57017da7738a,90345B5B064D,"Given the freedom to pursue one's take on a subject, helps foster self-confidence. In my high school experience, doing a personal research that was interesting really helped create a sense of pride and accomplishment. Being confident leads to trusting one's ability rather than relying on others;and in our competitive society for careers, self-reliance is extremely important. Furthermore, allowing students to pursue their own designs lets them mature into adulthood. The apex of self reliance is adulthood and self learning is meant to teach and prepare students for their future. By removing the dependency of a teacher when doing a project, self support truly shines through, giving students hands on experience on the hallmark of adulthood. This is similar to the concept of parents not supporting a baby for too long so they can learn to walk on their own. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c14114477833,90345B5B064D,"
+In conclusion, summer projects should be student-designed rather than teacher-designed as it fosters creativity and self-reliance. Given the freedom to pursue their own path, students not only learn more effectively but also become more unique. Letting students be unique allows for a desirable diverse community in which society becomes enriched by. Therefore, everyone should aim for topics that interest them when they are given the chance, as that is when humanity truly learns at its best. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c96894a09c41,906B27CFFFA0,"Do you agree with the princable about. Evrey student must particapait in at least one of these three things. Number one they must paly a school sport,They can be a yearbook desiner,or a school counclier. Well I am going to go in more depth and explaine the jobs to you. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8b118df6e4f5,906B27CFFFA0,"I am going to exblaine each job that the princable requires us to do. The first one is sports such as baseball,softball,basketball,track ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d69f860a5d4f,906B27CFFFA0,"thoses sports could be hard for some people that have. Autisum they are not capable to run,or just a mintale illness. so I am going to have to dissagree with the sports because not all the members of the school can do it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e52e6903cf2,906B27CFFFA0,Second thing is they could take place in a yearbook club to rplace a related art or a sport! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+484dd108bc50,906B27CFFFA0,I am going to explaine what a yearbook club dose So a yearbook club has many things to do the main thing is they can go in anddesine our school year book! There job can get hard because they take there time and effort to make our yearbokk look perfect! All in all I feel like everyone could do this club beacuse it dose not take that much effort and time or running or athtisume. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1344f39ff8ad,906B27CFFFA0,Last but not least school conciol. The school counciol does a lot of things here are a few. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bb73a402486f,906B27CFFFA0,They can help around the school such as help people work threw there problems. They can go to gideness more and help with them. Oh and this is a big one when the 5th graders come over to tour the middle school. There incharge beacuase there the school councle. All in all i think this would be a fun job that everyone could particpate in. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58e351183ecc,906B27CFFFA0,I am going to have to agree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fe5e0a5b356f,906B27CFFFA0,I really feel like a lot of people could do that plus it would be fun for all the people with disablitys to learn and get closer with students do you?? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8d4215d475de,9072C97C4481,My principal has decided for all students would have to participate in one extrarricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fab8bb4d10e8,9072C97C4481,Say for example the student would have to go outside in have to play sport's. But they would go over the rules for every sport that they have out to play with. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bd19a7aab5ab,9072C97C4481,In for the year books you would be able to learn how to spell word's that you never new how to spell. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d90a0c43861c,9072C97C4481,The student's would also get a feel of how other student's our in they might even make a new freind's. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c463559498a4,9072C97C4481,because I think student's do not get enough exercise. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8add7cd390f2,9072C97C4481,"If student's got enough exercise it would be more athleyt's. It would be more student's outside playing all types of sport's. They would be able to breath better than other poeple that do not like to exercise. In if student's do not get enough exercise they would not be able to leave a nice long life.
+
+I think it is good for student's to exercise if all student's exercise they would leave a long healthy life. In if you leave a long life you be able to see the world in travel. But if you do not want to take care of your body you would not leave a long nice life. Like for example you would have to go threw alot to try to leave a healthy life. But if you do you would be able to complete your life long dream. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97ce9f8a6a02,9072C97C4481,For the year books you would have to type poeple names. In the rason I think that is good is because the student's can get to laern new student's ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52cb8d125f21,9072C97C4481,So if i was you i would start exercising early so I can be haelty when im older. My princeipal has decided for all student's would have to participate in one extrourrieular activity. In if you do not participate in one of the extourrielur activity you would get in big trouble with the princeipal. I do agree for these so student's would start getting in shape in really healthy. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a3ab16f9c497,909404A6C673,"Students are usually on their phones and doing other mindless tasks during summer break, and they don't stimulate their brains. As a result, some schools assign summer projects to ensure that their students learn over the summer and are better prepared for the next school year. These schools debate on assigning teacher-designed projects, which have specific guidelines, or student-designed projects, which allow for more creative freedom. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+10d7634f375f,909404A6C673,These summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+73a7c7c4310d,909404A6C673,"students would be able to personalize their projects, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+19bcce98a6c3,909404A6C673,"the projects would be more enjoyable, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ec91ad35db7b,909404A6C673,the students would put in more effort into their products. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+775e6733ac36,909404A6C673,"For example, in an interior design class, the summer project could be to design the students' dream house. One student may excel in drawing, so they could draw their dream house. Another student may excel in graphic design, so they could create a three-dimensional model of their dream house on a computer. Lastly, another student may like Legos, so they could build their dream house out of Legos. On the other hand, teacher-designed projects would minimize the creative freedom because they would set specific guidelines on how they want their students to complete it. All in all, students can complete their projects using the unique skills they have with student-designed projects. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2aaa494d5d3b,909404A6C673,"Summer break is a time for students to have fun. When a teacher designs a project, there are usually set guidelines on how they want the project, which sometimes isn't what students would enjoy. This would make it difficult for students to find the motivation to complete their projects, especially over summer break. On the other hand, with student-designed projects, students would be able to personalize their projects, so they could use their own interests to complete it. When students are able to individualize their projects, they find it more enjoyable to complete since they would include aspects that they enjoy and minimize aspects of the project they could potentially dislike. For example, in the previously mentioned interior design summer project, the student who excels in drawing could dislike using computers. If the teacher had required the dream house to be made on the computer, the drawer could find it difficult to finish the project because they don't enjoy using computers. In contrast, if the drawer was able to design their own project, then they could draw their dream house while having fun. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+198129c1ac10,909404A6C673,"Generally, students put more effort into the subjects that they enjoy. Similarly, if students are able to design their own projects, they would enjoy completing the projects and work harder on them. If the previously mentioned interior design teacher required everyone to build their dream house out of Legos, the student who draws and the student who enjoys graphic design would enjoy the project less and find little motivation to complete it over the summer. As a result, the drawer and graphic designer would put minimal effort into their Lego dream house, for they may just build a house with little detail and minimal unique thinking. On the other hand, if the dream house project was a student-designed project, the students would put a lot of effort into creating their dream house since they are able to design it with the skills that they have and enjoy using. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1510c8c38f08,909404A6C673,Some may argue that students could design the summer projects so they require minimum effort since they want to complete their projects as quickly as possible. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fb387a1985e4,909404A6C673,"However, when you give students creative freedom, they are more likely to put in extra effort because they would enjoy their projects more. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+aa0bc18e33fe,909404A6C673,"Schools that require summer projects should assign student-designed projects because students are able to use their unique skills and interests to complete these projects. Additionally, students would have more fun completing these projects since they are allowed to express their own creativeness, which helps motivate the students to complete it during summer break. Lastly, students are more likely to work harder on their projects because they would find their student-designed projects more enjoyable to complete. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a2d0512e49b5,90BC4A0EDED0,"Imagine checking the notification of your cell phone and in the blink of an eye you get into a car accident.Texting and driving is the act of texting, checking social media, composing a message,emailing, or using the internet while driving a vehicle.Texting and driving is an issue that has resulted in car crashes and even death. Picking up a phone while you are behind the wheel could put yourself and others in danger. People should be cautious and know the risk of picking up a cell phone while they are driving.Cell phones have become and is a very big distraction. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+eaf7d34fdb63,90BC4A0EDED0,"Drivers should not be able to use them or even have them in their hand,lap, or etic while they are in the act of operating a vehicle. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+66397d3cce6e,90BC4A0EDED0,The cell phone has become so much of a distraction to the point where people are immune to picking up their phone every time they receive a notification. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+21c717f5a47b,90BC4A0EDED0,"The disturbance of a notification on the phone has been the cause of man accidents and deaths caused by car wrecks. Statistics show 6 out of 10 teenegers have been in car crashes due to distracted driving. In the text located on www.teensafe.com it shares the story of 25 year old Natasha Boggs of Ohio and how texting and driving affected her life and others. It states "" Ohio woman Natasha Boggs, 25, killed two 14-year-old girls and severely injured a 15-year-old boy when she was texting and driving.""The article also tells the story of 20 year old Dillon Jackson a pickup truck driver that was distracted by his cell phone which took other innocent lives. The text states ""A driver of a pickup truck killed a whopping 13 individuals in a Texas crash in the spring of 2017. 20-year-old Jack Dillon Young was behind the wheel of his truck and was texting while driving, causing him to cross the center line several times.""
+
+This informs you on how cell phone distraction could risk the lives of not only yourself but others as well. ? people are injured or killed due to cell phone distraction. Cell phone disturbances have a big impact on car crashes and deaths. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48250585b4b2,90BC4A0EDED0,"Cell phone distractions are very dangerous when someone is operating a vehicle. Distracted driving can include things like eating, drinking, talking to others while driving, and etc. Out of all those distractions cell phone interaction is the most common and dangerous. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+662a771d5841,90BC4A0EDED0,"When paying attention to your cell phone it takes away the attention you need to focus on the road and drive safely. In a text on www.wikepedia.com it says "" Using a cell phone while driving increases the driver's risk of causing a crash. Drivers are distracted, decreasing the driver's awareness on the road, leading to more car crashes."" This simply means that the use of the cell phone while driving can result in a dangerous outcome. It is also said that ""4.6 secondspass when a driver's eyes leave the road to text at 55mph, it's like driving the length of a football field blind."" When a driver's eye is taken off the road the chance of wrecking another car or even running off the side of the road and harming yourself. The dangerous outcomes could be losing control of the wheel, crashing, running off the side of the road, harming others of all ages, running into objects ( poles, signs,cines,etc.), and the worst of all, death. Cell phone disturbance can be very dangerous when driving which is another cell phone should not be used while driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6bdbf50c6d9b,90BC4A0EDED0,People should consider certain things before picking up a phone. Things can be done to lower the accidents caused by the distraction of a cell phone. Companies have taken a huge step to decrease the number of wrecks caused by phones. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+44870522629a,90BC4A0EDED0,"Cell phone companies such as AT&T realized how big cell phones are distractions to drivers so they come up with programs. For example, a big program today is "" It could wait "". On the site www.independentmotors.com it describes the can wait program. It quotes ""AT&T itself has helped drive these conversations with its It Can Wait campaign, which has seen more than 7 million people take the campaign's pledge to drive more safely. The company also launched its DriveMode app, which keeps all phone calls and texts quiet while you are driving. The app turns on automatically when it detects that the user is moving faster than 15 MPH and turns off shortly after it detects that the user has stopped."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0aa74540a48,90BC4A0EDED0,This shows how companies have noticed the danger of cell phones and have taken action onto fixing it such just like AT&T which is a huge cell phone company. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+884e84f0e53e,90BC4A0EDED0,"Another program example is the Stop Texting AND Driving Distracted, or STANDD program. This program was launched by a lady who lost her son due to a texting a driving incident . The website states "" Like a few other organizations on this list, STANDD has its own app for iOS and Android smartphones. It starts up as soon as your engine does, and as long as you're moving more than 10 miles per hour, the free app deactivates any texts and calls that you receive, letting the caller know that you're unavailable with an auto-message."". This goes to show that there are ways to put an end to all the horrible incidents caused by texting and driving but it is all up to you. Programs have been made, apps have been released, and signs are around you everyday to remind you not to text and drive so do what's best and focus more on the road and not on your phone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+14cccaad964d,90BC4A0EDED0,"A simple message or text could wait. If people paid as much attention to the roads than their phones there would be less wrecks or car tragedies. Cell phones are huge distractions on drivers. Drivers are put in harm once they pick up their phones to check a text, post on social media, change songs, make videos, and etc. Cell phones while driving is like taking a risk. People are put in life or death situations once being distracted by their phones when operating a vehicle. In conclusion the use of cell phones should be prohibited while driving.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3337fc6358cb,90F40592D04C,Studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+33e71c73af2e,90F40592D04C,"in the article it says that numerous spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, maybe thiss issue explains why nit a single spaceship has touched down on Venus more than three decades, Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to studydespite its proximity to us. Also, the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on surface. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photography the dense videography ineffective. Venus is so hot that it can melt metal. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a74649e658a,90F9C06E19BC,I think that people should be able  to use there own car when they to for there to get around aleats lower gas prices so people want be in there cars much as they u to be. Some people need to use there cars for the onlu way for transpartion to get doctors and dentisis appoinments ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3df473578d90,90F9C06E19BC,they can also use there cars less ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7880521fe01f,90F9C06E19BC,there wasting valuable resources in world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+52fb0d73f736,90F9C06E19BC,because gas makes the car so that a valuavble resources we need to keep so maybe if people stay out thers cars it will make the gases prices go down they you can use for only if really need if you the car as a emgercy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3effbf19d79c,90F9C06E19BC,"
+Why are there no cars on Vaubans street but expect there are only a few down town in but thats only if you are ride the tram to get around. I think every state should have a trams and bus and bullets trains to get them to one  to another that would totally cut out the numbers of cars you will see on the so why not consider trying a new idea to get cars off the road maybe invent something that will occupie peoples so they want have to you there cars to get around I am try it and see though it might be good thing to do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e959f6cfcce9,90F9C06E19BC,"
+Why do people by more than one car its only one of them and mulitiply cars so why waste money more than one car when you can sell your for things that are important like paying a bill or get gorcery for you house or just helping otherss out so i thing that dumb for peole to have more than one car if you are not going to use the cars all time I understand that celebrites haves mulitiply cars because they show them but the car usage is still high but people can do what evere they want with there money who I am just a boy i coming telling you people with more than car is really really ricdulious to but hey I am going sit back and let people use up there gas in there so be it.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19fca4dc571b,910B844ACCA1,"Nowadays, technology and science became one of important parts in human life, it makes life runs easier. With human's intelligent, technology is improved day by day. Many things are dicovered, or invented that we don't even know about their appearances. One of them is the Facial Action Coding System also known as FACS, which technology could identify human emotions was created by Dr. Paul Eckman. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+fecb53b27601,910B844ACCA1,"In my opinion, I think this techonology is useful, especially in order to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. ",Position,Effective,,,
+fbdcd53f976e,910B844ACCA1,"Life contains many differences, includes positive and negative things, truthful or untruthful. Some people said emotions are never lie. We could figure out the statue of someone by looking at their face, and that's true. However, life is something really complicated, sometimes things in front of you don't mean like what you think. Likewise, even though the expression from people face is the most authenic, when they are trying to hide their feelings, we literally cannot know their real emotions. The changing of teenager is issue that causes headache for parents, their characters aren't the same like before, their emotions are changed. Both of them could not find the common speech, and push them further each other. That is the moment, the childrens easily fall in the darkness. For real instance, children or students aren't agree about their parent's thinking, or the education from school completely. Most of them don't say it out, or talk back. It's really affects about effective in studying and their plans in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4fd968d6dc4d,910B844ACCA1,"The creation of FACS is a way to solve this problem, it could read student's thinkings, from that parents and teachers could understand about expected of their kids, or their students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+590e376d1689,910B844ACCA1,"Therefore, they could modify their ideas, lessons to able to suitable. It leads to success in learning of teachers and students; or it could make kids and parents get closer, and decrease the bad things happen. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+49ce4730033c,910B844ACCA1,"The use of the technology can read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It helps to understand students feelings, or reactions about the lessons, thus the teachers can recognize what are things helpful, and unhelpful. From that, the effective in studying will be increased. Besides that, it also brings advanges in communication between parents and child. The adults could realize their kids are struggling with something or not. Then, they could find the ways to share, or help. In order to not let anything bad could occur, as having negative thinkings and lead to suicide. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8232ec33b6b2,912848EF6E5E,"Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is the closest planet to Earth In the terms of the density and size, and on distance too, but each previos mission was unmanned, no spcaecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. It's been three decades since a spaceship has touched down on Venus, Is a challenging planet for the humans to study even despite of the proximity to us. Also, there's a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets on Venus, but what's more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the Venus atmosphere.
+
+The temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what is on planet Earth, the conditions are far more extreme than anything we humans encounter on Earth. Even if Mercury is closer to the sun, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet on the solar sytem and it also presents additional impedimentslike powerful earthquakes, erupting volcanoes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+26f355911e58,912848EF6E5E,"If the scientists know everything about this why are they discussing about visiting Venus if it isn't a good place where we humans could be and live at, because we wouldn't even be able to live for a day just as the spacecraft that didn't even survided just only for a few hours. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aa1f85c48cb0,912848EF6E5E,"Probably long ago just as it says on paragraph 4 that, Venus was maybe covered largely with oceans and it could have supported various forms of life just like here on Earth and Venus then also has some features that are analogous to Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84b5992ffd3c,912848EF6E5E,"It's better to keep studying Venus then to just go visit it, because there would probably be stuff on Venus that the scientist don't even know about and then the people that would go visit Venus would be in such danger. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e5eb0c5b6d73,912848EF6E5E,"In conlusion, scientist should still be doing research about Venus, because everything they have known recently about Venus it sounds really dangerous just to go and see it on their own then they would put their lifes in danger, and I don't think that's what they want ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+dc76acca488f,912848EF6E5E,It's better to keep doing more research about it instead of just going without knowing everything about the planet. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a58c40e66660,915D9EE27FFB,I think that this is pretty cool to be able to read for face experssions. Like you can tell if someones happy or mad by a computer just reading your face. It can tell because how your cheek bone and moves one way and they can tell your emotions. Its crazy too how fare we came to be able to have a computer be able to tell if your mad or sad or any emoetions you have. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4084603b9461,915D9EE27FFB,So I think its a good idea to have to something that able to do something like this. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d8c4502e86ff,915D9EE27FFB,I think this is a cool thing that your able to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+387cf9e40193,915D9EE27FFB,"like how they knew Mona Lisas emetions. How she was ""83 percent happy, 9 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry"". There will still be people like how they are in paragraph 2. ""How can a computer recognize the subtle facial movement we humans use to express how we feel?"". I think alot of people will like it because its something so cool and new and everyone would want to go try it out and go buy one to do it. ""The faical exoressions for each emotion are universal. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be8e63d1d5b8,915D9EE27FFB,Its something thats really cool alot of people and little kids would like it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5302cd36bfb5,915D9EE27FFB,Everyone would want to try and see what their emotions say. So if they did come out with something like this alot of them would sell quick and i know they wont be cheap. We have came so fare from having to wait 5 minutes to take a picture to now being able to tell a persons emotions by a computer just reading there face. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4ef049b945e5,916E7E75FC4A,The author suggest that studying venus is a worthy pursuit ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+62c843f5cba7,916E7E75FC4A,"because, venuse have been the most like earth planet in our solar system. they belive that long ago venus was probably coverd with large oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.""venus can sometimes be a nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6502a030d82a,916E7E75FC4A,"NASA has been thinking of many ideas to help humans explore venus, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e603d8f5116c,916E7E75FC4A,"possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray of venus. bump like vehical hovering over 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. like a jet airplane travel at ahigher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the deadly ground conditions by staying up and out of the their way. researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.
+
+NASA have come up with example of tool that can help build a safe ship for human to travel to venus. some simplified electronics made of silicon carbibe have been testred in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in venus conditions. mecchanical computers which is an old technology might help people explore venus. peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited on ground. most light cannot penetrate the dense atomoshpere, rendering standard forms of photograhy and videography ineffective. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fd3cda39c3c,916E7E75FC4A,Even though venus is the close to earth twin there are still many dangers to exploring the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01e535d1129f,916E7E75FC4A,"the atmospere contains 97 percent carboin dioxide. the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. on venus surface tempertures aveage over 800 degrees fahrenheit. the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what humans experiance on our own planet.
+
+The condition on venus are far more extreme then anything humans can encounter on earth. the enviorment would crush even a submarine diving to the deepest parts of our oceans. venus has the hottest surface temperture than any planet. high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eurupting volcanoes. powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58dc6444e981,916E7E75FC4A,"striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value. because human curiosty will likely lead us into many equally intimidating enveavors. travelers on earth and beyond should not be limited by danger to explore venus more. venus should be expanded to help meet the edges of imagination and inovation. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2d3adac0102,916E7E75FC4A,i think that the more NSA workes together to make tool to go see mre of venus them they will be able to explore more anytime. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d2fd15daeae3,91AEF41A3766,"In the story ""A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves"" Luke was a cowboy rode the waves. he helped people in Europe after War World 2. Luke went to Europe to help people that didn't have shelter, food or animals. When Luke just graduated highschool his friend Don asked him if he wanted to go to Europe. Luke knew he couldn't pass this opportunity of a lifetime up.44 Nations joined together to form
+
+UNRRA [ther United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaton Administration.] ""UNRRA hired ""Seagoing Cowboys"" to take care of the horses, young cowes, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up."" Luke wanted to help people if he didn't go he wouldn't like to help people.
+
+'Luke did get some free time when he was on the boat he got to see Venice, Italy he also toured an excavated castle in Crete and mareled at the Panama
+
+China"" he got to see many things many people don't get the chance to ever see. It was an aventure for him. ""it took about to weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to china"" It was hard work to keep ever animal safe and alive on the long journey and animals could have died of sickness and cancer and a lot of other thing like not getting any excercie. "" Heping out on his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared Luke for hard work, but not for dangers at sea. On Lukes second trip, Luke served as night watchman. His job awas to cheack on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captian, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's haert raced as he shot feet firt toward an opening on the side of the ship. a small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overborad into the dark Atlantic. He was happy to be alive. But he couyld not work for a coulpe of days because of vraked ribs."" He was really happy to be alive and he was ok with craked ribs because he was alive. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7821edf19861,91AEF41A3766,"Reasons that people like Luke became or are going to be a Seagoing
+
+Cowboy is because they like to help people in need that need food a shelter. They don't just do it to go to Europe and see everything and to have fun, they do it because they care about other people. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0b70d277bd6c,91B2B7072E51,"Should we have a facial action coding system for schools?
+
+I do and do not think we should. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1a0973599c14,91B2B7072E51,First off I think it would not be a good idea because it's gonna distract the teachers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb0d1db3f69c,91B2B7072E51,All the teachers are gonna be worried about how the students feel. Some students do not like talking about their problems at school. The teacher is already gonna know the students emotions before they sit down in their desks. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d8529a8fc5a,91B2B7072E51,I wouldn't want my teacher knowing all my emotions. Teachers are supposed to teach you but not only just teach but be there if you need to talk to them about something ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef83f91c4a9d,91B2B7072E51,I feel like its invading privacy of the student. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a530fa5717b,91B2B7072E51,I think we maybe should because it might actually help the teacher learn more about their students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+61b0ccaf23d7,91B2B7072E51,Some students do not like going to talk to the teacher so maybe if the teacher talks to the student they might feel more better and the teacher will also know about that as well. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae957517f25d,91B2B7072E51,I think if we got it in schools right now it would probably help. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9bf3d36fc4fe,91BE694E60E0,"In this article, the author is telling it's readers that traveling to Venus can be risky. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9e0a539436db,91BE694E60E0,In the article it says ''Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system''. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78776bdea034,91BE694E60E0,"Venus was once covered with oceans and could have had life. Venus still has some features that are similar to Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment, and has similar features such as, valleys, mountains , and craters. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea6a248a3951,91BE694E60E0,"Venus now has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. The average surface temperature is over 800 degrees in Venus. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. Even though Mercury is closer to the sun, Venus is still hotter because of the atmosphere. These conditions are far more extreme than any weather on Earth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b874215fa6ae,91BE694E60E0,"Even with these harsh conditions, scientists still want to visit this planet because of human curiosity. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff8197124752,91BE694E60E0,"NASA is working on approaches to study Venus. NASA is sending humans to study Venus, so we can have for knowlege of our sister planet. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad69c5638095,91BE694E60E0,Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is using devices that we used in the past here on Earth for studying Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f87a779d061,91BE694E60E0,Human curiosity is leading us to find more knowledge of our sister planet.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3953ba5d19a8,9207F5E4EA09,"Luke had just graduated college and his friend Don Reist invited Luke to go to Europe with him. Luke said yes because it was an opportunity of a lifetime and he could not pass it up. Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy.
+
+Luke said, ""Being a Seagoing Cowboy he got to see Europe, China and he got to see the Acropolis in Greece."" He got to see so many great sites. Luke toured an excaveted castle in crete and he marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.
+
+Luke had to travel a lot. But, even though it took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United states and a month to get to China. On the long journey
+
+Luke stayed busy by taking care of animals. Taking care of animals and traveling was not all Luke did on the boat, the cowboys played lots of games. Some of the games they played was baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals lived. They also did table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling and other games to pass time.
+
+Luke said that ""being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure."" For Luke it opened up the world to him ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dcb77aa58308,9207F5E4EA09,"Luke had a lot of fun seeing different sites, meeting new people, playing fun games and caring for people in a different, and better way.                ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c30766bb61c3,920DC8B0BC4E,"The author supports the idea ""that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit dispite the dangers it presents,"" by telling us why we need to know, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2cc31c2a53d,920DC8B0BC4E,how it affects us ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6eca369c6fef,920DC8B0BC4E,how we will ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eccb1c27f85a,920DC8B0BC4E,"This is something that has been well thought out by NASA and they always know what , why and how they are doing something. The author uses insite from NASA to support his idea. By doing this the author has shown us the importance of Venus. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a07e304da800,920DC8B0BC4E,"First, the author gives us reasons why we need to know this ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf54ae9e5f65,920DC8B0BC4E,"The author says, ""Often referred at Earth's ""twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionaly the closest in distance to,""(paragraph 2). This means, if Venus is that closely connected and similar to Earth then we can learn and adapt. They continue to find new discoveries in order to keep our civilization in tacked, and surviving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8958c1b35995,920DC8B0BC4E,"Second, they explain how it affects us in our ordinary way of living. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b6fd2e9e6a6,920DC8B0BC4E,"They answer the question of, If it is so dangerous why study more? They found that it could have been another Earth once. I know this because in the text it says, ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system...The planet suface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountins, and craters,""(paragraph 4). This means that by studying it no matter it's condition we can to learn about it and why Venus is in the condition it's in, maybe to even prevent it for Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c7bece04719,920DC8B0BC4E,"Lastly, the author supports their idea by telling us how we are going to uncover more information without loosing more. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f031ecd17443,920DC8B0BC4E,"They explain that NASA has a theory that sending anything electronic to it will die off within hours, where as sending parts from the 1800's - 1940's won't. I know this becaues in the text it states that, ""NASA is studying other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lested about three weeks...These devices were first envisiond in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940's during the war...but, these devices made calculations by using gears and levers without electricity...By comparison, systems that use mechanical pats can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces""(paragraph 7). This means that hypothetically NASA could send older tech and find a way to uncover more information. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+04467384a9a7,920DC8B0BC4E,"Therefore, the author supports his idea, ""that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents,"" by giving us multiple reasons why we need the knowlage, how it affects us and how we will accomplish that. First, by telling us that Venus is like our twin planet and learning what happened we could adapt. Secondly, by showing us that we are can prevent our own downfall. Lastly, the author tells us how NASA expects to pull this off. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+abd5d44bddcc,922293101A74,The author gives lots of evidence and resons on this idea throughout the article. The author also gives some facts that really helps supports this idea. There are some really good things that are in the article that gives this claim some meaning ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e5badf8d5357,922293101A74,"In all, the author did really good with this article and also put some good time into this article too. I enjoyed reading this and learned some interesting facts about Venus. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+f50b62af65c9,922293101A74,One major things that caught my eye was that the author used NASA as some research in his article. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9b2187bbf29,922293101A74,"He also uses NASA as a resource to help with the support of this idea. NASA is a wide known for space exploration and research for our solor system. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d2167460af0,922293101A74,"At the beginning of the article, there is an introduction that gives some intesting facts about Venus. The author also talks about where Venus is in our solor system and how it is related to earth. This is a very good start in the introduction of Venus and what the article is about. In the third paragraph, he talks about what Venus atmosphere is like. There is termperature facts and the air you need to breath is useable. This starts to bring up the question. Is Venus worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents? The fourth paragraph, he talks about the terrain. This starts to bring up the question even more than before. In paragraphs 5-7 NASA is the main idea for those paragraphs. In those paragraphs also NASA research and facts are presented about this topic. The last paragraph has a powerful meaning and a idea that is very strong. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e4425664792,922293101A74,These facts lead to the evidence is many ways ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b6be745b18a8,922293101A74,Facts are what built and help evidence today. There is a lot of evidence that support my claim. Here is a couple of pieces of evidence taht support my claim. The first piece is that the author used NASA. NASA has done a lot of research about this topic. The second piece is that he used lots of facts to convince the reader taht he has put some time into makeing this article. This helps show that the author did really good in presenting the topic and give some really good evidence to back up his article. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1a21c7fe68bb,9224F001F074,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0af8b3ef5288,9224F001F074,"Studying Venus is a good idea and learn more about the Venus from other planet and Venus has a pretty good nickname and The National aeronautics and Space Administration has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study venus, Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+454e9385fbf4,9224F001F074,studying Venus might be dangerous but it good to learn more about other planets ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bea28b514c69,9224F001F074,"than alwys studying our panet and Venus sometimes called the ""Evening Star,"" is one od the brighest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur strgazer to spot. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5cf786600ed3,9224F001F074,"Second, Venus is the most closet to Earth in terms od density ans size, ans occasionally the closet distance too ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+531fb59ac032,9224F001F074,"Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus because Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97b3b3072f03,9224F001F074,"Third, Venus is a thick atmosphere of alomst 97 percent cabon dioxide blankets. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+25e8b5577460,9224F001F074,"Even more challenging are the clouds of ighly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+583e398f026e,9224F001F074,"In Conclusion, their is alot of ways to study and some of them are not the same as someoe who wrote it and studying Venus or Mars are very good to study in other planet it because Venus and Mar are the closet planet in Earth. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuase of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeovers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a7241e9ebfbe,922D3C44BE46,You think technology can read emotional face expretion? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2c93ed71acce,922D3C44BE46,Yes I think because the new technology are very avanced ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6aa9e608ac46,922D3C44BE46,"cameras have many fuctions and are very smart for take of pictures, the new cell phones have this technology one example is Iphone 7 or Galaxy 8 this smartphones have many technology, they know when are you sad or happy they have a special camera.
+
+The news computers have many technology they are the best for this work because you can modify of system , you can put one camera and stard to work, you need create of program for analized of expretions and you can suporting with other student .
+
+One need put of front to the camera and other need take picture and analized in computer, the next step is analized the facial expretions and see the muscles his face, eyes, cheeks or his smile the computer need analized the information and procces.
+
+First student have a natural smile and computer detected this, he is happy, next student are crying, computer analized he is sad. but when student have pockarface the computer no detected nothing because no have any emotions, but what happen when one student make falce smile, but this is really good, I think of the computer detected he is happy. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+87e8f7a16450,922D3C44BE46,I think of people need make manny technology because actual computers can be trick ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+99c23de91c09,923CD5D638A8,Do you think the Face on Mars is a legit person or just a landscape? Is it just mother nature pulling tricks on us? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+81fa27c913fe,923CD5D638A8,I think it's just a landscape trick. It happens all the time. Like the potatoe with a face on it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6424a35bbc4e,923CD5D638A8,"Here is why. First, the face doesnt seem to have a body attached to it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1dd356c4a32,923CD5D638A8,Second it looks like it is attached to the ground ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ee9eec6ee87,923CD5D638A8,there has been no sign of life on mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d2f183ee5a7,923CD5D638A8,First of all th face looks like it was sculpted. It has no body that can be seen ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fda79f5e964b,923CD5D638A8,Unless it is a decatetated head. The land scape couldv'e played an trick on us. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f03e9ba515b,923CD5D638A8,Second of all It looks attached to the ground. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e444820cb883,923CD5D638A8,f it were a readl head the end outline wouldnt be smoothed in to the ground. It would be laying on top and have a shadow showing the back side the the skull. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3911be4e375,923CD5D638A8,"Third, there have been no sign of life on mars ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0f8e7eebd4f,923CD5D638A8,"Yes, we have found flowing water but we have not found any type of living orgamisim. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cd6c726f0df,923CD5D638A8,"So here is why I think that the landscape is playing illousions on us. First, The face looks scultped. Second, It lookes attached to the ground and third, there is no sign of life on mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bf7c2f52556d,924F1F4490F9,"In 1945 world war two was going on in Europe. Don Reist invited Luke Bomberger to go to Europe. When they got there Luke and Don both sighed up to help with the animals that were shiped overseas.
+
+In the story it said, in August 1945,Luke and Don bolth got there orders to go to New Orleans. Luke and Don arrived they day the war ended. the they went to greece Luke turned 18 before arriving at greece and Luke might be able to get drafted foe the millitary.
+
+Accroding to the text, By the time Luke was drafted he had already made 9 trips the most of any seagoing cowboy. Luke was traviling from the Atlantic Ocean to the eastern caost of the united states. Luke said it took about two weeks to cross the Alantic Ocean and a mounth to get to China. Luke was carring for the animals that were crossing and they had to fed and waterd two or three times a day.
+
+the animals food had to be pulled from the lower holds of the ship so they could eat. Luke was prepard for this because he had to help out on his aunts farm.
+
+Conclusion, On one rany cold night Luke was on watch to watch the animlas and he went to go tell the captian the report and he slipped down the ladder and had cracked ribs.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+355a4a92c116,9263362F551D,The last ship to try to land on Venus was three decades ago. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d482498d74ed,9263362F551D,Astronots and scientists have been tryong to beat the challenges of Venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+86c3689a1d60,9263362F551D,NASA has been working on technology that could survivle the harsh conditions of Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1075bbc70b2,9263362F551D,They have been testing silicon carbide electronices. NASA been trying to make a blimp-like vehicle that could protecet the astronots that are in it. Scientists have also been working on mechanical computers. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e45533c36723,9263362F551D,"The blimp-like vehicle can be used as a research area as well as a living area for the astronots. It can go higher in the air meaning it can avoid the storm, earthquakes, and erupting volcanoes. NASA has not found a way to use the vehicle to help reasearchers get samples from Venus. Scine they are in the air above the gas clouds it would be hard for researchers to get photography or videography of Venus surface. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16e27871e7fa,9263362F551D,"They have been fooling around with silicon carbide electronics. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+407eaa65212a,9263362F551D,NASA and its scientists has been useing silicon carbide electronic in a testing chamber that is set like Venus. This new technology could be used on Venus when NASA figurs out a way to increase the survability time of silicon carbide electronic. They have not figuer it out yet and could be decades before they figer it out. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5386c05c8fac,9263362F551D,They also have one more item they have been test that is mechanical computers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+51600171c45e,9263362F551D,"We used mechanical computer in 1940s dring World War II. Scientest think that we can make the parts immune to Venus's harsh conditions. They could be made to resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. This is one of the of projects that will hopefuly beat Venus's challenges. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f72d11d6d97,9263362F551D,There are three ways NASA has been try to beat Venus challenges. We have yet to try them on Venus. If one of this ways works we have the satitfation of completing the challenge Venus gave us. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e25c9872665,928548A07586,"What if I said that there are computers that can identify students emotions during class, well if you thought that was fake its actually real! Recently we've made this new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that allows computers to show human enotions and even things like paintings. For an example we used this on a famous painting everyone has a least seen once in their ifetime, which is the Mona Lisa. It shows that she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0bccde1c5fcc,928548A07586,Those are things that can be cool to find out but it can also can be really valuable in a classrom. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ba3d046f90ca,928548A07586,For a classroom it can valuable like after lunch every student must use it before starting class to check how they're feeing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5163378d908e,928548A07586,"It will very useful if a student is sad or angry percent is high. It can give the teacher a reasoning to go up to the student and ask, why are you sad or why your angry. It can be very valuable like if a student just went through a terrible situation and the teacher can try to help cheer them up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e0c52183e69,928548A07586,"One downside is that it can give out a students business and if like a student is sad, it can become a joke to the other students and make that student even more sad. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ec8ee59d5b1a,928548A07586,"It also identify if your making a fake smile or not as it can tell by how you make your smile like, if you make a fake smile your mouth is stretched sideways, as in a real smile your zygomtic major(that begin at your cheek bonees) lift the corners of your mouth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9e295c335f2a,928548A07586,"This technology might be seen as a joke, but it can be very valuable in a classroom. It would be helpful if classrooms to get a hold of it as it could benefit the students. Most students are not always happy in school and this technology can be the one to help that not be a case. Teachers can now help the students get even more smartier then they already are. Whoever thought a computer can be the one to help take your students to the top! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9f30f5b90b18,92909B8C3BF4,"Im going to tell about how the author of the article ''The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" is trying to convince people to explore and stuying one of our 8 plants called ""Venus"". ",Position,Adequate,,,
+702115cbf83a,92909B8C3BF4,"He starts off by geeting in detail with describing how vevus is by stating "" Venus sometimes caleed the Evening Star,is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,and saying venus is the second plant fro our sun. Earth in terms of density and size,and occasionally the closet in distance too. He also discribed the plant as a cloud-draped world, and says maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched downn on venus in more than three decades ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24d38cc40251,92909B8C3BF4,"The author also gets into some math into this by breaking down some percentages that venus has compared to other plants by saying. ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus "". he also says that one the plants surface , temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and theatmosphere pressure is 90 times gretaer than what they have experienced on earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+671813568a89,92909B8C3BF4,"Venus has the hottest surface tempertature of many plants in our solar system, even with mercury being closer to the sun. He basically telling us about the percentages and the deepest amont of venus and other plants we didnt reaserch about. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c650d319a0a3,92909B8C3BF4,"In more of the storyhe tells you the things yo are exprcted to see on venus. Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth. The planet has a surfae of rocky sediment and includes familiar features suck as valleys, mountains, and craters. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b7297d28019,92909B8C3BF4,He changes the subject and goesminto the NASA and how they have ideas on sending humas to study venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+48da06d63b49,92909B8C3BF4,"he describes how going out there would be like by saying imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above theroiling venusian landscape. Also at thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but tha air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8abd32853ee,929CEA8DDB32,"Cars can be great or bad, many places are banning days of driving to slow down the inevitable of car fumes in the enviroment. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+599ff23d6cad,929CEA8DDB32,Advantages include ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c2f0a18a42db,929CEA8DDB32,a healthier way of life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a076144e572,929CEA8DDB32,"Walking makes you healthier, and so will the cleaner air. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83ada2774225,929CEA8DDB32,Creating less polution in areas in good for the enviroment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e2d8e304495,929CEA8DDB32,"Global warming is real, and it is slowly happening. And cars are major factors for the cause. Some citires are taking action to this by banning driving in some way shape or form. This actually helps bring down smog. Paris saw the difference in only a few days! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21646cb11101,929CEA8DDB32,"Less polution is happemning because of the new bans of cars in some places. And people are loving it! A more healthier lifestyle is now being used. Less polutiion more healthier for you and for Earth. It wont let me leave this page, im confused.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dd35a0f6272e,93203D30E46D,"Would it be cool if you a computer can tell if you are actully smiling in a picture or if you are faking it? Will now therei is it`s called,""Facial Acton Coding System"" as transfered too FACS. In the aticle Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D`Alto this commputer likewise tells us your emotions. And you muscules on your face what it tellls us if your haooy. It also tells us different reactions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e67b6bf638e6,93203D30E46D,"In the article This computer FACS can tell us how your muscles can helps the omputer with the emotion you are feeling. In the article on paragraph 3 it says ""Eckamn has classified ix basic emotionsa-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movement of the facial muscles""(3). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dff865659d1a,93203D30E46D,"FACS loooks your face muscles to indecate what your emotion and true emotion in front of the video you are showing. It can tell if you are happy, sad or desgusted. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+598e9501cc1e,93203D30E46D,FACS can also tell emotions just like on your face musles. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+492cad373651,93203D30E46D,"In the article in paragrph 4 it says,"" the new emotion-recogniton software tracks these facial movement- in a real face or painted face of Mona Lisa""(4).This new computer can even exam you emotions on your face like it did on ona Lisa. Also, FACS even works on painted faces. It can tell if the painting of the persons face is happy not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13065e243768,93203D30E46D,"Another thing FACS can recongise what your face is doing face. In the article in paragraph 6 it says,""if you smile when a wed ad appears on you screen, a similar ad might floow. But if you fron, the ad willl be different. ""A classrom computer could recongize when a students is becoimg confused or bored""(6). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+994c8828d93d,93203D30E46D,FACS is a really cool computer that tells us what on your face how it reacts and recongise the face expression you can give in a classrom. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+75dcb5aa5ba2,93203D30E46D,"Inconclusion, FACS is a computer to set a facial action coding sytem to know if your expression. Also, it`ll know if you are faking it by your face muscles. It recongize your expressions you can give druning a class. FACS also works on paintings. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b72c70ff77dd,93203D30E46D,This new FACS computer is a really cool new technology system used in Advancd Science at the University of Illinois. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b50c843b00a9,939718B6780D,"in germany people dont have cars like they do in america. in germans people have to have a big place to park there car like a large garage. but i it costs 40,000 dollars to buy the garage. so 70 percent of germany doesnt have a car.
+
+on monday motorists are told to leave there car at home or there is a 31 dollar fine. almost 4,000 drivers where fined one day.27 people had there car impounded because of ther reaction to the fine. cars have been baned for 3 years. only buses and taxies are permited for the day. there goal is to promote alternative transport. violators faced a 25 dollar fine.
+
+parks and sprots cneters have bloomed since they have scut traffic. presdient obama has ambitious goals to curb america. studdies show that fewer americans are buying cars and getting less licenses as  the years go by.
+
+in america as of april 2013 the number of miles driven was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in january 1995.
+
+new yorks new bike sharing program and its skyrocketing  bridge and tunnel tolls reflect the new priortiy.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+521c797ca2b2,9399DBE21A35,Why would you want to limit car usage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+314a916b09fb,9399DBE21A35,"When you use your car people are making money. People need a car to far away places fast. cars are expensive, thats because people keep adding on to it and making it more fancy and of corse its going to be more expencive.
+
+If you limit cars most gas stations would be going out of bussniess and car places. gas stations buy the gas for cars to use yeah the gas is expensive but we need it and car dealerships would have so many cars they wouldnt know what to do with them cause no one would but them because there car would be limited to use so there car would be brand new. yes people are losseing alot of money from cars but its worth it cause we need to get places. if you make cars fancy yeah your going to have people to want to buy it but thats because you want them to buy it cars are killing the envirnment up though because the gas the people tearing into there grass people dont relize it but cars should just be used to get places and then stay there and then when there done go home. i mean if they can make a car that can scene if there drunk and wont start i would buy that car because it would tell you not to drive becaus eyou are drunk that will slove so many deaths and drunk driver accident problems. instead of making cars fast and look slicker and nicer and have the car talk to you with blootooth thats just dumb in my opion i wish they would just make cars more reasonable with things that really matter than just look nicer and more for rich people alot of people can afford cars so they should lower all prices and they would make more money becaus emore stuff will be sold like the drunk deceter car     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+70407739def3,939C163906D1,"In the booming world today, transportaion is essential. Trying to imagine life without cars for some people is like trying to imagine life without food or water, but cars arent ass essential as we think.  ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bee2d02e7422,939C163906D1,"But even if you drive a smart car or hybrid, emissions from these cars still affect the world around us. Lowered car use would help this improve. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+76520f950f6c,939C163906D1,Using less cars would also have more benefits for all of us. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+faa6f4d7843c,939C163906D1,"People in a samll town of VAUBAN, Germany have already stopped use of cars. People report to be ""Happier without them."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ee9c3684a249,939C163906D1,"In Paris, France, the warm days and cold night would trap the smog in the air. in order to reduce the amount of smog in the air, on monday drivers with even-numbered liscense plates had to leave their cars at home or face a $31 fine. Then on tuesday, motorists with odd numbered lisence plates had to do the same. This led to decreases in the amount of smog in the air. The warm days and cold night would trap the smog in the air. Another instance is in Bogota, Comlubia, where there was a car-free day. According to buisnessman Carlos Arturo Plaze, ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and to lower the air pollution."" This has led to newer sidewalks being paved, and new restraunts and upscale shopping districts to pop up all over the city. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2c2f2262d60,939C163906D1,"Less cars mean less greenhouse gas emissions, which inturn help our environment. It also leads to less stress and deaths among the people in the city. Less cars are the future of our world, and its not too late to start to help our environment and to help better ourselves.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e73e04923cfa,939E66CC3A0C,Do you love  drive? Well some poeple do and they just don't like to drive every day to work. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+90d3fd32757a,939E66CC3A0C,first thing if people don't want drive they could just ride bike to work that help them with exerics. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3ae7b1dffa9,939E66CC3A0C,"Also they don't know that the gas is ever high and they can't affored it and that why they walk or ride the bike.
+
+Another reason is that 27 people had there can impounded or on side of the road becuase  they ran out of gas. when you drive and you see your gas meter and it on the E and your car just stop and you about 2 miles form the gas stion and you have a gas can in the back but you don't want to walk and you know you need that gas so that you can get home you think,think,think and you said i'm walk and you get out the car get the gas can and go. and people don't like drive they can just ride the train to work or the bus becuase you don't really have to put gas in your can you just ride and get drop off were you work. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+68617b658bbb,939E66CC3A0C,"they should make sidewalk for people that want to walk to school,home,work,or freinds house. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74ad762263fe,939E66CC3A0C,"Well if they family want to go on a trip to see there grandma then they can take there car and go see her. And what ever car you got please look for the limit becuase some car drink gas and then you have to fill it back up again. If it was just less driveing they approach stores,and other thing that they can walk to. If you need a ride home you can call the tax and they will take you home and you really don't have to drive or put gas in the car. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1032ddd06455,939E66CC3A0C,I think people should stop drive becuase you really don't need to drive every day ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0438cddf0186,939E66CC3A0C,"about 4,000 people don't have there license and the drive. if you drive and it cold you should trun a on the heat to low becuase heat will messup your emission. and that why i should think that people should walk stead of drive all the time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2cfa7ec85aa,939E66CC3A0C,"We all the people should just say that Monday,Tuesday,Wensday we all should drive to school,work or where ever and Thursday,Friday,Saturday they should walk to work or take the bus. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+07cbd87bf1f2,939E66CC3A0C,the people should drive less. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+484a18ec1b6e,93E10E079796,"The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by saying ,""Venus is Earth's twin and closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size"". ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7bda35e7d0e0,93E10E079796,"In the article it says that Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus is the second planet closest to the sun and because of that the tempetures in Venus are way different than Earth's tempetures. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6d89ec00934,93E10E079796,"But some people or scientist actually belived theres life in venus just like earth but alot different because in the article it says,"" Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varios forms of life, just like Earth ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a3966db5f63,93E10E079796,"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth for example theres surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55207172e5c0,93E10E079796,"Even people think that Venus is probably our nearest option for a planetary visit just like in the article it says,"" The National Aeronautics (NASA) has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3207ece73e26,93E10E079796,NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bef6af7dd655,93E10E079796,"Since Venus is the second closest planet to the sun the tempetures are really hot, compared to Earth's tempetures. Its so hot the tempetures in Venus are like 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d8bcfeaead6,93E10E079796,But Earth and Venus are two planets that probably had same features along time ago and that we all know theres alot to discovered in our solar system and thats what i think the author was trying to support. And mybe it might happen in the near feuture and discovered more about Venus but for right now only time will tell.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b2e55e4a3632,946C874A9CCD,"The science of emotion recognition is complex and is becoming exponentially more complex the further a topic is being disscused. In the realm of arguing weather the use of emotional recognition technology should be used in a classroom can be a very difficult tquestion. On one side, you can say it may invade privacy, but on the other hand, it could help teachers see if students are understanding the topic. The question still lies on which one is more important for both the student and the teacher. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1bc721ff070f,946C874A9CCD,"In my opinion, this technology should be implemented into classrooms internationally ",Position,Effective,,,
+491f978bf6d4,946C874A9CCD,"because it will help students learn more effectivley, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+82e82e53b689,946C874A9CCD,also it will enhance the teachers teaching ability when they know where they're students are going array. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+11d6eb110587,946C874A9CCD,"This technology could be very benificial for students across the globe. The ability for a piece of technology to understand your emotions could come in handy. There are many outgoing students, but there are also many introverted students. Some students may not feel confident enough to ask for something to be repeated, so they may simply sit at their desks puzzeled for the rest of the class, while a simple question could've avoided this. If this technology is instituted, it will automatically know when a student isn't confident on the information and alert the teacher. By doing this, the introverted student won't be confused for very long and the topic could be revisited without the student to have to personally ask. It not only will help introverted students, but students across the board. Every student will benifit form this technology and will display in their grades. With this technology, the students acedemic achievements will expand exponentially. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc0af8816e6e,946C874A9CCD,"Becuase of this ability for teachers to understand their emotions, the quick turn around of revisiting the topic and teaching it a little differently could help the students absorb all the information, especially the information that they mau have not conprehended initally. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+371776aacec9,946C874A9CCD,"This technology will be very valuable for the students for both their enjoyment throughout school becuase of the reduced stress, and their improvents in acedemic grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+16d62f95611f,946C874A9CCD,"This technology is not only bennifical to the students, but to the teacher as well. For the teacher they will automatically know if a student is struggling and in what topic. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffc1db7d12a6,946C874A9CCD,"Thius could be very valuable to create a strong teacher studnent realtionship where the teacher is able to understant the smallest change in emotion to when they're confused or if they understamd it. This relationship could improving the learning environment and how comfortable a student with their students and peers. This technology could help teachers in both big and small schools. In big lecture halls, it may seem to be difficult for a professor to understand the emotions of all the students sitting before them, they might not even be able to see everyone because some may sit further away. With this new technology, teachers could be notified when some students become confused and then revisit a topic. Small classrooms could benifit greatly to this as well. Althought they are in a closer proximity then in lecture halls, they still will have the issue of not understanding the emotions which could lead to confusion. In smaller classrooms the teacher could know what they're doing wrong and be able to fix this easily without having to disturb the students. They can evaluate the emotions throughout the lesson and then later, they can change their lesson plans to adapt to the confusion of the students. This is again, a very valuable piece of technology that could help the teachers grow in their profession. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7dcb626786b6,946C874A9CCD,"Initally one may think that this technology is redundant and that a teacher could just help the student, and that it may be invading the students privacy. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+75c1715083e6,946C874A9CCD,"In reality, this technology continues to prove its many values, and it's evergrowing amount of benifits that completly overpower all the ideas that some may think its unnimportant. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7518e863c188,946C874A9CCD,"This technology is valuable to both teachers and students equally. The teachers are able to improve their teaching techniques and the students understand more in school. This technology, however, is nowhere near done. This technology can be further improved in many aspects. I could keep improving and always creating a smarter version of the present day technology, that may one day, change the course of education forever. This could be implemented in the online schools to understand if a student comprehends the information the value of this is unspeakable and should be institued in classrooms globally.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3ba9ba531a14,9483857CAA80,Have you ever wonder if someone is lieing?! Well their is a new technology software that can decode how other people are feeling. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5098562be10d,9483857CAA80,Using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cb1a7ddd75ed,9483857CAA80,Since it can let you know when someone is lieing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dde687fbe9b4,9483857CAA80,or needs help from the teacher when its afraid to ask ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d527d86e10d,9483857CAA80,also when someone has worries about something. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9771f1f24e0,9483857CAA80,"""The Facial Action Coding System enables comuters to identify human emotions."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a48a517d86d,9483857CAA80,This system can be very useful for school class rooms since it can detect when someone is lieing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88abc480395d,9483857CAA80,Because the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, with all 44 major mucles in the model move like human mucles. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,
+eadc336ac4c4,9483857CAA80,"That ""classify the six basic emotions like happiness, surprise, anger, fear, and sadness, which then assosiats with each characteristic movement of the facial muscles."" 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cfb771662888,9483857CAA80,Or it can let you know when it needs help and he/she is a afraid to ask. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35852d101bea,9483857CAA80,"Its like when you look at someone and see that they are sad or happy. It can detect an espression like that. ""Now imagine a computer that knows when your having trouble."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eddc91ca8b23,9483857CAA80,"The most important thing is letting your teacher how you are feeling, she can help you out when you are worrying. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74a245cc0e9d,9483857CAA80,"""The facial expression for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show a varying degrees of expression."" In a why in which you can help express them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5932945bcd6,9483857CAA80,That's why Facial Action Coding Systems sould be used to read emotional expressions in classrooms. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aa824b0ad72b,94A8B4DE1712,If you dont have a car you will reduce greenhouse gas ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ff39076e0d6,94A8B4DE1712,it will rudeuce accitents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c58dd2c584b6,94A8B4DE1712,less people willl be fined so tht means more money for you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6939b05ca083,94A8B4DE1712,"congestion was down 60 percent so thats good in the capital of france after five days of intensifying smog. cold nights and warms days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. the united states has a program called the environmental protoction agency is promting car reduced communities and, ligislators are satrting to act.
+
+disel fuel was blamed since france has a tax poloicy that favors disel over gasoline diseles make up 67 percent of vichles in france compared to a 53.3 percent averqage of desiel engines in the rest of wester europe according to reuters. Delivery companies coplianed of lost revenue while exceptions were made for plug in cars hybrids and the cars carrying three or more passengers. public transit was free of charge from firday to manday according to the bbc.
+
+Bogota colombia in a program thats set to spread to other countries millions of colomians hiked biked skated or took buses to work during a car free day yesterday leaving the streets of this capital city eeri    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44c37eec0044,94E1D46A0544,The principle wants all students to take at least one extracurricular activity I agree with the principle ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ce04c8d99535,94E1D46A0544,"having one will help you real under stand to manage your time wisely,and it can help you under stand how you spend your time. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a1f5fd20578,94E1D46A0544,"My opinion is if he makes this a requirement for students will have a better chance to succeed in the real world with what they learned for example managing,and learning the value of time will help you make the right chooses. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+117f2f26c5d7,94E1D46A0544,One reason I agree with the principle is that studies have shown that have done a extracurricular are the most likely to succeed in life cause they have learned the too most important things in life to me is what you should use your. Time on or what is worth your time not much people know this ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+820b182dba6a,94E1D46A0544,Second reason I agree is that time is priceless it is not infinite people dont know how much time they really have therefor its better to make the best of it before its all gone therefor the people who have chosen to use there time. Wisely they have much more time cause they have done what they had to do getting more time but it docent mean the people around them will get the same cause they chose there path and they chose there toured success. By choosing that path they have chosen there future which docent really change unless there has been a large impact like death or courage to do what ever it takes to succeed no mater what any body says to try to turn you down. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e0a65575ce28,94E1D46A0544,"Final reason is managing time is what you need for jobs therefor if you are learning it early own the essayer it is,and to lost of people this is a great skill to have therefor this quality will get you many jobs since you know how to. Work your schedule therefor there work on time team projects have time on your schedule and someone cant make it they type of people often help out and get promotion or get played into a low payed job but that docent really happen often. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+166e4c33548c,94E1D46A0544,"Sincerly,therefor if the princple dicidcides to make having a elxctoal activity a requirment he or she is leading students to succeed in th future if all schools do this etheir their will be less poverty or more students passing by the years will drop out which do the people choice? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f801651f5452,9500B623A6AC,Have you ever been sitting in class wondering what emotions the students around you are feeling? Have you ever wondered how to make things less boring and confusing in the classroom? Well now you can with the all new Facial Action Coding System. It's a system that can figure out the emotions that you are feeling just from your facial expressions. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e9702e7c0f37,9500B623A6AC,I feel as if this could help in the classroom but not as much as Dr. Huang thinks ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fa7fcbde3847,9500B623A6AC,I think that yes it would help with making class less boring and/ or confusing but it can also just lead to even more frustation or sadness. It also isn't going to help if you are sitting in front of an actual human teacher and not a computer. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f409d4f3aca,9500B623A6AC,"If a student if feeling strong emotions such as saddness or fear; they need to talk to a friend about it, someone they can trust, not a computer. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e83b39b9eca8,9500B623A6AC,"So in conclusion, I give this system about a 50% chance of it helping in the classroom like Dr. Huang says it will. Theres just not really anything you can do to make school fun for someone that doesn't think its fun. I think it could help with other activities though, such as playing video games or watching videos. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5f4dfbdfb18d,951F417BA64F,When it comes to the technology that reads students emotions I think its a great idea of having it in classrooms ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3fae9389a59a,951F417BA64F,"Although some may ask, why dont you just ask us how we feel in this class ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+82ca824d9aa2,951F417BA64F,Others might just nit want to answer the question. So it would be easier to just get your answer from a mechine that gives you the answer you want. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a4aedaebaf91,951F417BA64F,There are many advantages to this technology when it come to reading other emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8e13dfdddbf,951F417BA64F,"When using this device you could find out if many students are interested in the activity the teacher is talking about. You could also find out if the are just bored to death that they just want to get up and leave. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb537aac81b7,951F417BA64F,This technololgy could help with many things in the future by getting rid of all the non-fun things that happen in classroom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+544a544ffb7b,951F417BA64F,"If this technology was in high schools I think the way teachers teach thing now days would be way better. For example, when the author put the mini lesson about moving you face in different emothions that was a good lesson. Just from that I learn that just moving your face around in different emotion could make you feel like the face you just made. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7cea287b74f,951F417BA64F,"When it come to technology about your emotions in the classroom i think it would be very useful. Not only will the teachers know if students are interested, they will know if they need to change the way they teach things in class.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2ad68d3ecba0,95765CEE7D74,"Many schools incorporate summer learning into their students' curriculum to have them maintain knowledge gained throughout the school year. Although these projects are thought to be beneficial for students, the topics and activities given by teachers are often strenuous, and frankly, uninteresting to students, especially during their summer break. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6072c801de54,95765CEE7D74,Summer projects assigned to kids should be allowed to be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a13d7280b81,95765CEE7D74,to fit the student's interests ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d1b8515b55b,95765CEE7D74,keep the child engaged ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d2a48baa1a6,95765CEE7D74,to promote responsibility when constructing a project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b48314533435,95765CEE7D74,"As a child grows, so do their interests and beliefs ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e08dd66cfbc0,95765CEE7D74,Allowing student designed projects means letting them take control and organizing their own thoughts in which they see fit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd6ca0c76aa3,95765CEE7D74,"Students must be taught responsibility, and by allowing them to create their own rubrics, guidelines, and ideas, it promotes creativity and a sense of control in a child's mind. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3ba125c267c,95765CEE7D74,"By allowing this flexibility of guidelines and rules, kids can stretch their ideas further without having to feel they have gone off-topic because it will be designed by them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19febeab6bc6,95765CEE7D74,Although some might claim that teacher designed summer projects are more structured and educational for students ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+212c52d571e1,95765CEE7D74,"this is a flawed argument because most assignments given by teachers are strict and are only focused on a certain topic that not every student will take interest in. It's also important to give students a chance to be creative with their own guidelines and requirements, something that is restricted when a rubric designed to a teacher's expectations is given. Students would simply thrive more if handed an assignment they could create and build on their own. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4a539850674a,95765CEE7D74,"schools should begin leaning more towards student designed summer assignments because of the immense freedom that is given and the responsibility that is required of students to create their own projects. It is important that from a young age, kids are able to write, discuss, and learn more about topics they are passionate about, and it is even more important that we do not limit their creativity because of the idea that projects should be teacher designed. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+696173574732,9579E25F6CCC,"Image this, Your a person who doesn't really get out much, you don't talk to that many people, and you just generally keep to yourself. Now, think about this next question I'm going to ask you. If you were like that, would you be jumping out of your seat to do an extracurricular activity? If you were in this position, you would most likely say no. For some people, they need someone to help them take that step, and get out their and meet new people ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c99618ecad3a,9579E25F6CCC,"It's for this reason why I think that all students should have to do at least one extracurricular activity, ",Position,Effective,,,
+cd36f6010f89,9579E25F6CCC,"it can help them make new friends, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+15327d628a04,9579E25F6CCC,it can help them discover new hobbies and talents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6761f2797b3c,9579E25F6CCC,"it can improve their confidence and team building skills. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+284835f7ed29,9579E25F6CCC,My First Reason for this way of thinking is that it can help the person make new friends! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad05559b7a24,9579E25F6CCC,"For example, look at this study that the Social Interaction and Communication Association took at a local middle school. When Students were pushed, or put out of their comfort zone to more things with others, they talked around 30% more than they use to, and had 45% easier time making friends with others. This shows that pushing these kids to talk to others more, or easing them out of their comfort zone, can really help them find people they can depend on. Showing that doing something like this can really be good for them. There isn't just that, there is also more evidence that proves this point! Generic_Name, A Counselor at Generic_School, Had this to say about pushing kids to do activities to meet new people ""There is usually a reason kids can be like this, it's because they haven't found the group of people that understand them, when pushed though, they can find those people, and feel like they belong,"". This shows that, from what Generic_Name observed, the students can find their people if they have someone help them try something new, and that they just need that little push to find them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2ce74e3386e6,9579E25F6CCC,My next reason is that it could help you find talents and interests you wouldn't have found out by yourself. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+01d7a337b4fe,9579E25F6CCC,"For Example, Here is what Justin Green, Author of fantasy books, had to say when asked about how he learned he liked to write, ""Honestly, I first learned about my love of writing when I joined a writing club as a teenager, without that club, I may have never learned about my passion,"". This shows that, even adults learned from taking that step, and learned about hobbies that they would have never known about otherwise! Another Example I have is a study made by The West Virginia Sports Association. They asked multiple college sports teams about when and how they gained the interest for the sport. A total of 50% of them said they learned about it through being pushed to take that step, and going out of their comfort zone. This means that, it's not just writing and more smaller hobbies, but sports like soccer and football as well. Showing that even famous people may have been pushed to take the step, and find their passion. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1125d3414db7,9579E25F6CCC,My final reason is that it can build confidence and team building skills! ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f1ff852ed22d,9579E25F6CCC,"Going out of your comfort zone can really help you feel better about yourself, and not just keeping to yourself. Some Evidence for this is that, in a study taken by the Social Interaction and Communication Association, 60% of students that keep to themselves have lower than average self esteem. This would make sense seeing how if they always keep to themselves, they don't really have anyone to comfort them in their darker times, which this rule could help prevent. More Evidence that highlights this point is when Zachary Andrews, A College student from Colombia, had this to say, ""I honestly never really talked to that many people when I was younger, I didn't really like myself, and didn't think I deserved friends, but when my parents made me join the basketball team, I met and found people that I got along with really well,"". This would show that their is still hope for people that have low self esteem, that just have to have help taking the big step. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db1c6af57d93,9579E25F6CCC,"A lot of people on the other side say rule goes against people's right to make a choice for themselves. The most common example they use for this is that, in a study made by Mental Psychology University, 40% of students with lower self esteem and social problems often stay in their shell, out of habit and anger of being forced to participate. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ef9f784d14d7,9579E25F6CCC,"While that may be true, we can't help the people that will break out of their shell if we just look at the minority. Gary Smith, A Professor of psychology claimed the following, ""while there may be others that refuse to participate, we can't eliminate the rule completely, doing so could lead to the students growing up with social problems, such as depression, or suicidal thoughts,"". Looking at this, it shows that we are still helping people break free, and really live their lives, the others may just need more help with meeting new people. Everyone can do it, it just might take more time for others. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+45429b1772c7,9579E25F6CCC,"
+Overall, I feel that I have made many points and examples on why students should have to do at least one extracurricular activity. Such as it helping you make new friends, it can help them discover hobbies, it improving confidence and team building skills, and how we shouldn't focus on the minority when it comes to this rule. This rule can really help so many people that can't break out of their shells on their own, and really save them from a dark future without any support to help them through it ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+960dd63be610,957EE90E67F9,The author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ,Position,Adequate,,,
+59ab57575648,957EE90E67F9,"Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97366e793fd0,957EE90E67F9,human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidation endeavor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01103cf52159,957EE90E67F9,"I know this because in the text it says ""NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus."" In the article it also says ""referred to as Earth's ""twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e60d598fc74,957EE90E67F9,"In the article it also says ""NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. This is why the author suggest to study about Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+03bc2169346f,957EE90E67F9,"NASA has an future plan to send humans to study Venus because NASA wants t o experiemnt life on Venus. I know this because in the article it says "" Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" Another reason would be ""scientist even discussing further visits to its surface."" Final reason would be because ""Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us."" This is why NASA plans to send humans to study about Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9e6663476ac,957EE90E67F9,"Venus is a identical twin to Earth because Venus in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closesy in distance too. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+959eae9892ad,957EE90E67F9,"I know this because in the article it says ""Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds."" Another reason would be because ""scientists disscus further visits to its surface."" Final reason is because both Earth and Venus are very identical and scientist plan to expand human life and have people start studying Venus. This is why Earth is identical to Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dcd72e5fef5c,957EE90E67F9,NASA is approching to studying Venus because of its Atmosphere. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bc9ba5c9e923,957EE90E67F9,"I know this because in the article it says ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could of have supported Various forms of life."" Another reason would be because ""NASA's possible solutions to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."" Final reason would be ""scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand would need to get up close and personal despite the risks."" This is why NASA is approching to study Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5745452e2fc5,957EE90E67F9,The author suggests studying Venus because of humans are curious about this planet. I know this because NASA is approching to studying about Venus. Another reason is because NASA has future plans to send human to Venus. Final reason is because Venus looks similar to earth. This is why the author suggest studying about Venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+77b5ca618206,958BACFAF66B,"""The Challenging of Exploring Venus"", many scientists are wanting to exlpore Venus atmosphere. But it comes with risk and danger, possibly NASA scientists can break through that ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+1ae3d9b489bc,958BACFAF66B,"Venus is 'Earth's twin"", yet is a challenging planet for humans to study. Why? The thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus, with a tempature over 800 degrees Farenheit and an atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than what we could or would ever expirence here on Earth. Not to mention the erupting volcanoes, powerful earhtquakes, frequent lightning, with the hottest tempature of any other planet; traveling would be indisputable. Venus at one point was ""Eath like"", the planet still has familiar features such as rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7316345e9fbc,958BACFAF66B,"Someway scientist have thought of some way to possibly research the mysterious planet, NASA has created a so called 'blimp' that would allow the scientists to be able to hover over Venus landscape 30 miles up. At 30 miles up, Venus would be at a 170 degrees Farenheit and pressure would be what it seems like at sea level on Earth. It is not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. Although, most forms of light can't penetrate the dense atmosphere, concerning standard forms of photography and videography ineffective or not clear. There would not be any samples of rock, gas, or anything else that would be of use. To have a thorough mission and search, you would have to get up close and personal, despite the risks, and danger. Creating a more resistant of objects that could sustain the pressure, heat and other forces. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+934ee5629ef8,958BACFAF66B,"Venus is a difficult and dangerous planet to research, but perhaps one day scientists will be able to create the most effective way possible. ""Imagination and Innovation, not Danger and Doubts"" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eaa24c7bd31a,95A558C8882D,There have been many studies done to find a new home for humanity. One of the planets that scientist have been looking at as a new home is Venus. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+22f8311f7594,95A558C8882D,"Altought there are many dangers- such as the temperature, atmophere, and natural distaters- Venus has many good qualities and is very similar to Earth. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9d7ac8bed983,95A558C8882D,"Venus is similar to Earth by its air pressure being similar to the Earth's sea level pressure, being close to the sun having pleanty of solar power, and once believed to have oceans and support life. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+27848a16d959,95A558C8882D,"
+Venus is often called the Earths sister, or twin. Venus has a realitively similar size to Earth and is actually the closest in distance to Earth. Scientist believe, altought not able to land on Venus, that Venus has a similar surface to Earth as well. Scientist say that Venus has a rocky surface and, as the article says, ""... features such as valleys, mountains, and creaters"" (paragraph 4). With this, it is also believed that Venus once had oceans. If Venus had oceans, there is a chance that Venus can support life on its surface.
+
+Not only is there a posibility that Venus might have had water, the air pressure is very similar to the sea levels on Earth. In Paragraph 5, the article says ""... the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth"". This means that those who lived on Venus would not be crushed by the weight of the air pressure. On other planet the air pressure is heavy enough to crush a person and is not suitable to live on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c4ced7e4ac1,95A558C8882D,Another reason that Venus would be suitable for humaity is because it is the second planet in the solar system and is exposded to a lot of sun light ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b3713264be46,95A558C8882D,"As many people know, there is a big need for energy on Earth. As a result of this, the Earth is running out of fossial fuel and that is one of the reasons the Earth is dying. If humaity lived on Venus there would be a big source of solar energy, which is renewable energy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+48e9e2171b26,95A558C8882D,"But like everything, there is a down side to living so close to the sun. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+615146ae5138,95A558C8882D,"Venus is the hottest planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is the closest planet to the sun. Venus could melt many of the metals that we use in our everyday lifes. Because Venus is the hottest planet, the temperature can reach an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Not only can the surface temperature be high, but there is 97% level of carbon dioxide in Venus' atmophere. Scientist have proven that humans would only withstand three weeks on Venus because of these conditions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b3c79c43e37,95A558C8882D,"Even though there are many things stopping us from living on Venus now, there are still many things that we do not know about the Earth's twin. There is still so much more to explore on Venus. But for now we know that the air pressureis similar to Earths sea level pressure, it is close to the sun having pleanty of solar power, and is once believed to have oceans and support life. And one day Venus might need to become our new home. But until then, the human race will stay on Earth. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d030f089db4d,95BC127CB3A2,Have you ever thought what it would be like not having to pay for gas everyday? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f143aa6d2261,95BC127CB3A2,"Many residents in Vauban, Germany feel that going without a car was the best desicision they have ever made ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6517e0a1c282,95BC127CB3A2,"The reason why they feel that way is because of this quote ""large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, Along with a home."" This quote is basically saying that many residents in Germany would be spending over millions of dollars for a house and most of the money would be on one parking space that they necessarily dont need. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50183138c25b,95BC127CB3A2,i should limit my car usage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6aa06696f893,95BC127CB3A2,or just keeping driving in a car paying for gas everyday. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16369e16844a,95BC127CB3A2,From my poin of view I dont everybody needs a car. Some people just buy cars just to sdhow not knowing the reasons for having a car. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3ca0b67c0947,95BC127CB3A2,Car use up alot of gas and cars pollute the air really badly ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a43fc3ccec4b,95BC127CB3A2,"""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city."" This quote is basically showing that many cars in Paris have been polluting the air making it hard for others to survive .  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f89a655dd869,95D1717166FC,"Venus is Earth's sister planet. But along with being our sister planet, Venus has the highest recorded temperature of any planet in our solar system. Along with having the highest temperature recorded, Venus also has an atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than the atmospheric pressure on Earth. Clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid also coat Venus's atmosphere, making it difficult to even make it through the outer layers of Venus's atmosphere. So why would Earth's scientists still want to vist Venus? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6a1d83805f56,95D1717166FC,"According to the article, Venus is the planet that is most similar to Earth, well at least it used to be. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d095ebbc9d91,95D1717166FC,"The author tells the reader about how Venus was probably covered in oceans that could have supported life, similar to Earth. The planet also has many other land forms that are similar to the ones we have here on Earth, such as, valleys, rocks, and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+618d4f4166f8,95D1717166FC,"The author proceeds to say that ""the value of returning to Venus is indisputable."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6733531459ce,95D1717166FC,"Although there are many dangers of sending vessels back to Venus, the author states that the National Aeronautics and Space Administration, otherwise known as NASA, is working on ways to send astronauts to Venus. The author also tells the reader that solar power on Venus would be abundant, and that radiation levels would be similar to those on Earth. He goes on to say that the temperature would be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, not an ideal temperature for astronauts traveling to Venus, but it is survivable. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21e4448a82a5,95D1717166FC,"While traveling to Venus may take Earths scientists years to figure out, and be very costly, the information we could learn would be invaluable. Although Earth's scientists may be faced with many problems while trying to get astronauts to Venus, from the information provided in the article you could infer ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8522476f0a15,95D1717166FC,"he strongly believes that it is possible, and not only believes that we could travel to Venus but encourages it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+473fe2bcfa21,95DC8A3C2EFD,"The program Seagoing Cowboys ,is amazing even though u might of heard of it or not im going to try my best to make u want to be part of it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c46f6eb3a074,95DC8A3C2EFD,the program lets u go around the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1e359f49a57,95DC8A3C2EFD,",like in the story the said that Luke had travewled nine diffrent times. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b160b339079,95DC8A3C2EFD,There are lots of things that u could do there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73d6620df79f,95DC8A3C2EFD,"like get to meet knew people and some might even become very close to you. I am sure that if you, came to the program you would love it. You would have fun,free food,and a good place to sleep. Now some might lo0ve animals , and if u dont thats fine but im sure you would start to. they are kind,loving,and gental. This program might get u in shapeand fit,you will be caring and lifting things and im sure that will burn off some fat. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f71781835209,95DC8A3C2EFD,"Also if u come to the program,u would learn how to obay,clean,and be respectful. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4474ceceebe,95DC8A3C2EFD,"Im sure that a young mans mother would be happy to know that,they are cleaning, and obaying laws,and showing respecfulness. Oh and befor i forget, they also will be able to cook multipal meals for his family. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7209d41470f,95DC8A3C2EFD,they will be cowboys ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74ca6ff903eb,95DC8A3C2EFD,"thats a great thing to help out with the animals. The young men will be helping around with horses,and cows. I am sure that the young man, will enjoy the view of the world that hes traviling. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef975c6b55c6,95DC8A3C2EFD,"I hope that you are convinced and made up your mind to let the young men come to this program. I am sure that youll enjoy it, till next time . ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a777ee51447b,95EE2E824EB6,"Every day millions of children come home on a bus instead of staying after school, and for many, there is a very good reason. It seems to make sense, having everyone take a extra curricular activity, but in reality it doesn't work. Every student has a reason to go, or not to go to an extra curricular activity and some reasons are not just because of preference. Not everyone has a lifestyle that allows them to stay after school or do a sport, many of the students won't have a way to get home. The school will not be able to provide enough buses for these students either. There isn't even enough room in the current activity rooms to hold 78 kids, and the materials needed are to expensive. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f842bb888218,95EE2E824EB6,Having mandatory extra curricular activities will be a disaster ,Position,Effective,,,
+3a67e4926ee4,95EE2E824EB6,"there is not enough room, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62a4f50d0225,95EE2E824EB6,it is to expensive ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f2c0220fb74e,95EE2E824EB6,students won't be able to get home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f4d04ec35ccc,95EE2E824EB6,If our school system made extra curricular activities mandatory the first problem would be the amount of space needed to support the students activity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7b7ffd96509a,95EE2E824EB6,"For example, there are almost 900 students in my school, This would mean in the 10 after school activities my school provides, there would need to be 90 kids in each one; That's enough to fill 4 classrooms. This brings up another problem, the school can't have 150 kids in one program and 10 in the other, so the school would have to chose the activity for us. Just that fact alone takes all the excitement out of the activity, just for reference, imagine the star quarter back on the football ending up in art instead, possibly destroying his or her whole football career. Most of my school's after school activities need certain spaces for the participants to practice and do their activity. For instance the robotics team only has one room with all of the vices, saws, and tools while the other robotics rooms will have students constantly running between the other rooms getting tools that they dont have in their completely different room. The cheer leading team will have to move to the gym to fit all the people, but so did the pep band, and basketball practice is already in the gym, but they could just go in the auxiliary gym which is smaller than the cafeteria, the problem with that is the wrestling team is already in the auxiliary gym. The school has no room to fit every team and all of the clubs. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cee3dbd578a8,95EE2E824EB6,"A dungeons and Dragons game along with all of the books and die is over 200 dollars, now imagining multiplying that by 7 just to afford the basics for the club. The robotics team pays around 600 dollars for each robot, and more for the competitions, now that program has to buy 15 robots and buy more slots at the competitions. If some how the schools were able to afford these expensive along with all other clubs, teachers, and staff salaries it would come from our local taxes. This would double our local taxes, but if the schools decide not to over tax the citizens of Generic_School than there would be no way the school could provide the gear and equipment for the school's clubs and teams. My school's sports gear is already worn out and our schools are in dire need of new equipment, but there is no way we could spend 7 times as much just to give everyone more cheap and basic equipment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0bfd95a8c29,95EE2E824EB6,"On most days my dad gets home at around six so when my activity ends at 4:30 in the afternoon i have to take the bus. Currently my school has 2 activity buses, one for Generic_City and one for Generic_City. The activity bus arrives at my home which is 5 miles away at 5:40 in the evening, it takes the bus 1 hour and 10 minutes to drop me off at my home. With a direct route the bus would have to travel at 4 mph. There is no way the school can hire enough buses to work almost 12 straight hours a day. If the school really can't find enough buses each bus would have to make 70 stops. Many students won't be able to be picked up by their parents and will be forced to endure the 3 hour bus ride through a city with only 30 square miles of residential area. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f6c3585955eb,95EE2E824EB6,"If our schools really made after school activities mandatory, it would be a disaster. One of the biggest issues with this topic is that in its simple form it looks like a great idea, but when you look at the details and what it would cause it shows the big mistake it would be. Giving every student the chance to do an interactive activity they enjoy would be incredible. Sadly, doing that in our current school system would cause all after school activities to stop going to competitions due to the over crowding; The students would not be able to pick their own activity and would be forced to do something they are bad at or just dislike. Making the activities would not only be a punishment to the students of Generic_School but to the teachers, the bus drivers, the custodians, the administrators, the taxpayers, and even our entire county's well being. In this scenario it may at first look like everybody wins, but really when you look at the real facts everybody loses. The entire mentality of school will become even more negative as students are stripped of their choice to do something they enjoy and taken away from time with their family. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+704c0bf91b64,95EE2E824EB6,"Although the goal of this rule would be to create a good learning environment and a chance to participate in more interactive learning experiences, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+202691953ec7,95EE2E824EB6,our county administrators might fail to see the real outcome of this decision. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b7890d945801,9604D30A25AB,"In German suburb's, life goes on without cars. There is a new experimental district, that allows people to see how much you don't need a car for. The new district without any cars, has stores and malls in walking distance. so there is no need for a car. Which can save a person lots of money.
+
+People have sold there cars to live in this new district. But if you moved with a car, when you buy a house. And a 40,000 dollar large garage on the edge of the development. The residents also say that not having a car is a lot less to worry about. And the Unite States is promoting car reduced communities.
+
+Paris bands driving due to smog, Paris was forced to enforce a partial driving Ban. When days of near record pollution was getting higher. If u were cought breaking the band you would be fined. They lifted the band when the smog cleard enough.
+
+Paris has more smog than any other European Capital. But diesel fuel was blamed, cause they have a tax policy that goes for diesel over regular gasoline. Although Beijing, China is the most polluted citie in the worlde.
+
+Car-Free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Car free day, is when no cars are allowed on the road except buss's and taxis's. People walked, biked and, road bikes. Other Colombian cities are joining the year around event. People from different countrys came to see this event, and were enthusiastic about it.
+
+The end of car culture, people have been buying and driving less in the past years. The amount people drive now is what it was in 1995. Also there as been a large drop in people geting there permintas and licenses, from 16 years old to 39 years old. And people have been taking public tranporstion and car-pooling more.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b6c36505696,9615F113FAA1,My principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. I disagree with my principal ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c4f111f999cc,9615F113FAA1,"you cant force anyone, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+257f02ddee51,9615F113FAA1,they can do whatever they want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd3a5f1debf8,9615F113FAA1,"some people are not best doing extracurricular activity. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dadcac97b9bb,9615F113FAA1,Forcing someone is not good because you cant tell someone do things that they couldnt do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+637480db4229,9615F113FAA1,"Some people dont like playing sports, working the yearbook, or serve on the student council.
+
+Not everyone have the same opinion, but many people have different opinion. Forcing an students to do something probably make them feel that they have no rights. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cde35909319,9615F113FAA1,"The students should decide what they should do, not the principal because students should get their own opinions ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d432e48d713,9615F113FAA1,"Letting the principal decide the students what to do, make me feel not very good because it make me feel like he is telling me what to do and i dont like that. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+460094620bce,9615F113FAA1,Some other people are not good at doing sports or working the year. Some people are different from others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5da428af3fa,9615F113FAA1,Some students are best other things and some are not. Many students have their own taste on something. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f3e4c0510e82,9615F113FAA1,"I disagree what is the principal is saying because they cant forcing any the student, the students should decided they own, and some people are not best doing extracurricular activity. The students should be able to choose what they ever want.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7e8d10d187e3,9631D2A1BB2C,Im going to tell you if the facial action coding system is a good or bad idea ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+009ed46f9c44,9631D2A1BB2C,"First the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an “action unit. Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman has classified six basic emotions— happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness— and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3c1f2aba24a2,9631D2A1BB2C,"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,” observes Dr. Huang, “even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression” (like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements— in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci’s masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3b6beac5430d,9631D2A1BB2C,"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive “calculation” every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0602c3ff39ef,9631D2A1BB2C,Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8879a7e628ae,9631D2A1BB2C,"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. Imagine a computer that knows when you’re happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” Dr. Huang predicts. “Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.” The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive— for video games or video surgery. “Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,” notes Dr. Huang. “So computers need to understand that, too.” 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b1186e1bf4a5,9631D2A1BB2C,In conclusion the technology to read peoples facial expressions is a great idea because the computer could help students out if they dont understand the work just by reading there faces.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+014ec9039407,963859B3739B,I belive the advantages of limitng a car usage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cd20a400a57c,963859B3739B,we have most of the people who are not driving with the right responsible license ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ca0ea63288a7,963859B3739B,we have some who are getting in severe car accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f46a613775a1,963859B3739B,there are pollution in the air. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e41788e6886f,963859B3739B,you dont have to pay for any car ticket or parking garage fees ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84695dc58660,963859B3739B,As a result half of the families don't own cars about 50% of them sold there cars ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adea749a9759,963859B3739B,It somehow made them feel a whole lot better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b5015f73d98,963859B3739B,"In Vauban you have there reseidents walking. Even we we people taking the suburbs, as a public transportation with less space for parking as if your where driving your car. They are increasing numbers are pravite car owned by burgeoning middle class cities to help out in another way of transportation. Most of the public transport serving surburbs play a much larger role. Even number license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home for odd- number plates.
+
+Drivers were fine according to Reuters. 27% of peole impounded for their reaction to fine. Beijing,China known as the most polluted cities in the world. Freezing nights caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. The gas was blamed since France ha sa tax policy that has favors diesel engines In my own way there are alot of advantgaes of limiting car. But as of some people its a hard way.
+
+Colombias hiked,biked skated ot took buses to work. During a car-free day yesterday leaving the streets of this capital city eerrily devoid of traffic jams. Recent studies say that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and also getting fewer licenses as each year passes by. In America the number of miles driven dropped steadily. All the diffrent changes and diffrent counties and cites people who stopped car commuting as a result of recession. inconclusion based on the passage information displayed ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d167d8c9bcc,963859B3739B,I believe them are advantages of limiting a car.                    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+165a14c3f159,964639CCF90C,How the author support his suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents is ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7befa0c4fb1b,964639CCF90C,"venus is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to sopt.
+
+Venus is the secoynd planet from our sun.
+
+Venus is also referred to as Earth's twin, Venus is also the clostest planet in distance.
+
+Venus is sometimes right around the coner in space terms, humas have sent numerous spacecraft to land in the cloud-draped world and no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.
+
+Venus has not been touch by any spaceship for more than three decades.
+
+The article also said, ""on the planet's surface, temperatures averge over 8-- degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving in the deepest part of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.""
+
+At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.
+
+Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not ecceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+269118c30520,964639CCF90C,These are the reasons why the author suggested that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0970d86af6c2,96B312BD472F,"It is said that, over summer break students tend to forget the majority of what they learned during the school year. Once the year begins, their teachers advise them to use the information given from the classes taken prior to assist them. It should be out of the question, that students need to do school work during their 2 month-long summer vacation. The question at hand is, who should be in charge of creating these summer assignments, the teachers or the students? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d222e91d9f7d,96B312BD472F,The apparent solution is that the teachers should be assigning these projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+17aec0ac4a86,96B312BD472F,they have credibility in their subject ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+670d27c7fbc8,96B312BD472F,a knowledge of how students work based off of experience. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+461b30bd8859,96B312BD472F,"Firstly, a teacher has a certain credibility that students do not ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2841d742ec46,96B312BD472F,"The goal of these assignments is to help the students fortify their knowledge over summer so that it is not lost. These teachers go through years of university studying the subject that they teach, so why should a student who has taken the class for one year have authority over summer assignments. For example, AP BC Calculus is an immense subject with a variety of different units of math. If a student tried to make a summer study guide, they would only have a year of experience under their belt. On the other hand, teachers, who have been teaching/studying this subject for years, have a strong understanding of each unit and how to teach it in a unique way. The credibility of the creator of the assignment must be strong, so the student can have an easier time understanding the subject. Thus, teachers should be assigning summer assignments. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ef61368dc3e,96B312BD472F,"Following my previous statement, teachers who have been working with students for years know the best strategies for getting students to absorb the subject. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa73fbf2e8fa,96B312BD472F,"Many students have a hard time grasping a topic. If students decide to ask a colleague before a teacher, they have the chance of getting incorrect information or no help at all. For example, many students in the AP Computer Science course have to figure out problems of which have many different solution. Students who don't want to give away their specific answer will try to help students figure out a secondary solution. Unfortunately, most students will not be able to figure out a second solution, because they don't have enough experience. Once the student asks the teacher for help, the teacher will be able to help the student find a solution because of their expertise. Therefore, teachers can offer a more valuable source of knowledge that will stick with the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+730bbfcf23de,96B312BD472F,"Although the student designing the assignment knows how other students' brain works, they don't have the experience that teachers have. Students designing assignments don't know exactly how to get through to students who do not know how to do the work ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+545c70d25209,96B312BD472F,". On the other hand, Teachers who have been working with students for years will know how to get a student to grasp the topics. Therefore, teachers designing assignments will know how to mold the assignment into a more enjoyable experience. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c6e650e2e2b3,96B312BD472F,"the efforts that teachers put into their own education provides strong evidence that teachers should be creating and assigning summer assignments. The years teachers spend in school give them the required credibility that is nessasary for students to trust teachers' judgement. Also, the effort teachers put into their work, to make sure their students are able to understand the topic, comes from their experience as teachers. Use these points to figure out that teacher-designed assignments are more beneficial than student-based assignments. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+64c49a687b4d,96C077AC2014,Why would there be a face on mars? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f8ec8f2e6c52,96C077AC2014,It could be a computer image hicup ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89dee8b1be9c,96C077AC2014,The land erodes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8da936f114b9,96C077AC2014,"There are a lot of things that are natural and look like faces. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1e9a57f12f9,96C077AC2014,"But, it still might not be natural ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f899f74c939,96C077AC2014,"No the rock formation is natural. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+02f5e9b1f88b,96C077AC2014,"First off, it could be a computer image hicup ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6be255ee871,96C077AC2014,"What I mean is That the camera that is moving takes different pictures of one area as its moving. I can relate to another ""alien"" sighting. A comet passing earth was thought to be a triangular UFO
+
+but the telescope took three different pictures at once and gave it that UFO shape. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08c0983ca42e,96C077AC2014,"Secondly, The land erodes over time ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d69d0bb4002,96C077AC2014,"The land could have eroded land could cause a ""face"" to appear. This ""face"" is nothing more than a simple act of nature and its way. In the top picture over time you can see it erode away, especialy the 1998 photgraph. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b053a872630b,96C077AC2014,"
+Thirdly, We see things that look like faces everyday, wether its clouds or land formations. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bba18b03e58e,96C077AC2014,"We see our faces everyday, so its easy to compare. In the top picture you can see a land formation, but scince we know what a face looks like its easy to compare to. In the picture, yes we can see some definition but its still just a land form. For example the man in the moon, it looked like a face but wasn't. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24bca233767e,96C077AC2014,"On the other hand, it might be. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c8bf5810e20,96C077AC2014,Most theorists claim it appears to be an Egyptian Pharoh. The theorists also claim that the martians built the pyramids. It's a theory but it might be possible. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a031b662b177,96C077AC2014,"
+In conclusion, No it is a natural landform. It could be a computer image hicup.
+
+The land erodes. There are a lot of things that are natural and look like faces.
+
+But, it still might not be natural. If it is unnatural then there could be other life out there. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+11057d62414d,9706F8E7D534,"Luke Bomberger was just an ordanery small town boy untill his friend ofered a jod as a seagoing cowboy. When he was thinking about it he said to him self that it would be a wonderfull oprtunet and just couldn't say no. He told his friend that he would take the jod.
+
+When Luke truned 18 thay could have drafted him over to the army but they didn't. Luke claims in the article that he was ment for the job becues he was rased on his aunt's farm. Yet he was not ready for the sea.
+
+Luke said he saw some pritty cool stuff. Thay also had some fun on the ship when the anamals were out. When Luke came home his aunt was probuly rilly thankfull that he came back ok.
+
+He probuly was thankfull that he got to come home becoues the other seagoing cowboys didn't do as much seagoing as him. Luke said going over seas let him be more aware for people and there needs, thats what lead him to latter on hosting international students in his home for many years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d540a9d24b2,97249F8DF48F,Technology is always improving. From a simple toaster to a toaster that can make several pieces at once. This facial recognition is a new way of detecting the true emotions of someone. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bb8c5ef61602,97249F8DF48F,"I think the use of this technology is useful to all students, parents, governement workers, and etc. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ab50a9da4da0,97249F8DF48F,"Facial expression does not have a set of rules you have to follow. For example, when someone is very angry, they might cry instead. In result, the computer might take it as sadness. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a97dd225ca1d,97249F8DF48F,"Most of the time, facial expressions are easy to recognize. In paragraph 2 of ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" it says, ""Each expression is compared against a neutral face"" (D'Alto 2). Everyone has different neutral faces. Most people have a good way of keeping in their emotions, making their face look blank. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1a566a60044,97249F8DF48F,"When expressing emotions, certain muscles are tied to certain emotions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c17f0d94760d,97249F8DF48F,"In paragraph 3 of the article, the author says, ""... your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes raises your eyebrows when you're surpised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger"" (3). Most of the time when you are surprised, you raise your brows. Also, when you are mad, you make a face, and tighten your lips. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b01d7e50fdd,97249F8DF48F,"When in school, you can use your facial expressions to show how you are feeling. In paragraph 6, the author goes on to explain that, ""'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huange predicts. ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" Several teens do not speak up when they do not understand something that was taught during class because they do not want to be embarrassed ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fc2e505649d,97249F8DF48F,"So if you are at home, on a computer, you will not have to speak up you can just act the same, and the computer will change it to help you understand more efficiantly. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+315bfb7ad4a6,97249F8DF48F,"In conclusion, facial recognition is a great way to get students on the right track in school. It can help the teachers decide if their teacher techniques are effective or not. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+13a9c2bb34c1,97249F8DF48F,"Also, facial recognition can help people understand how others are feeling in certain pictures ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0ad7a31c654,97249F8DF48F,"If someone throws on a fake smile for a photo, the computer will recognize that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de9aff9e1a0b,97249F8DF48F,"Many different emotions, have different ways it can be shown. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b99a6dd7e07c,97249F8DF48F,"The computers detect multiple emotions including: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness (3). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+053f2e8bb4d5,974383195606,Our principle has recently stated to all the students of SCHOOL_NAME that all students have to participate in one extracurricular activity. Some students agree with this new idea and some do not. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+84dd96b29f8a,974383195606,I agree with our principle that it should be mandatory to take at least one extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c98079526736,974383195606,"There are many activities to chose from but in my opinion, the best activities are doing the school musical, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f46e95d97ef,974383195606,participating in a sport ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d62908aec516,974383195606,helping teachers during your spare time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a06e38a0ecc1,974383195606,"Participating in musical gives students a chance to make friends and to get to know others. When I first moved here I did not have many friends or kids to hang out with but when I joined musical I began to meet so many people and they are considered to be my friends.
+
+Musical allows students to get to know others and to make friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d0daccd97f67,974383195606,"During your time in musical you have to memorize so many things like songs, lines, and dances. When you memorize these things it allows me to memorize things in school much better. I can memorize how to perform a math equation as well as learning a song. Musical allows students to memorize things better in school just like in musical. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9c63b0d694f,974383195606,musical also gives you a great sense of confidence. When you perform a scene in front of a audience you need confidence and when practice the scene enough you get confident about it and you perform it perfectly. You can use that kind of confidence when you are taking a test/quiz cause if you studied it enough you get the confidence to do well on it. Musical can teach you how confidence works and how to gain it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+245609f19662,974383195606,One of the main perks of playing sports is that they keep you in shape and keep you physically active. In our world today we see teens with there heads down looking at there phones but when you are playing a sport you become way more physically active. Sports allow students to be more proactive. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+edd91aba8e5e,974383195606,sports also allow students to think quick on there feet. When you play sports your has to think quickly which allows the brain to think faster. When I play baseball I have to think of the play quickly because if I do not think about it what will I do if the ball comes to me. So when you play sports your mind begins to think quicker which can be very helpful in school. If you need to think of a homework plan or if you need to think on if you have quizzes or tests that week use your quick thinking. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75488c5da1d6,974383195606,sports can also teach you on how to be a great leader. When you are playing a game of baseball and you are the captain and you are leading the team, you learn on what is the best play or who should go where. So sports allow you to learn how to be a good leader ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+35538e639467,974383195606,Being a TA allows students to assist others in need. When I was a TA for Spanish I got help kids who were struggling on a worksheet or who did not word meant. Being a TA allows students to assist others who need help. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a4e26c9e910,974383195606,you also get to learn what being a teacher is like and what the perks of it are. When I was a TA I learned how my teacher taught the class and what she did with students who were not doing what they were suppost to. Being a TA allows students to learn what being a teacher is like. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+563053e63c8a,974383195606,"when being a TA you get to meet more students and get to know what they are like. When I walked into the class I would be helping in, I saw so many kids and got to meet so many of them and they all were cool. Being a TA is good for meeting others ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb9b1a88924a,974383195606,"I stated in the beginning that I agree with our principle that all students should participate in a extracurricular activity. I said that due to the fact that extracurricular activitys are fun and there are many benefits. My top three activities were musical, sports, and being a TA(teachers assitant). I say that every single student in SCHOOL_NAME should do an extracurricular activity.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+938148f682f9,974C176869EC,"Luke was offered a trip to Europe on a boat by a friend and of course he couldn't say no. So Luke took the offer but World War II was going in Europe and many countries were left in ruins. A group called UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) hired ""Seagoing Cowboys"" to take care of the animals that were shipped over seas.
+
+According to the text in August 1945, they received their orders to report to New Orleans. They arrived August 14 the day the Pacific war was over. Luke turned 18 the day before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. He was discharged in 1947 but Luke had already made nine trips the most any Seagoing Cowbody had ever done. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+75adecb3ab42,974C176869EC,Luke had a great experience doing something he loved and also helping out others. He went to Europe to have a fun vacation but ended up helping fourty-four countries that were in ruins ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d7ed7a274cd3,974C176869EC,I would encourage a lot of people to join the Seagoing Cowboy program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43412e8ef338,974C176869EC,you get to travel around and visit a lot of countries but also you get to help out countries that aren't at there finest at the moment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5921262fb8b9,9756E31C449F,"Imagine sitting on your fluffy, brown couch, thinking of what you could do if you signed up for the drama club, band, or even strings. You look at all your friends posts about how fun yearbook club was when you weren't even there. How would you feel? After school activities can do a lot for you. I've always enjoyed them even though it's extra hours at school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+fb54d2aa9dff,9756E31C449F,"In my opinion, you should choose at least one extracurricular activity to do after school. ",Position,Effective,,,
+23d24f93cce0,9756E31C449F,"After school activities will prevent laziness, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b15cd7b70a9b,9756E31C449F,"bring happiness into going to school, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f59ee079b180,9756E31C449F,"it may even help you become more social. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+4db45686a77e,9756E31C449F,"When you actually have something to do after school, you are out running about, having fun, and you aren't even thinking about sitting on your phone, eating all the chocolate covered pretzels in the world. Knowing myself, all I want to do when I get home is eat, and of course, sleep. Being lazy leads to weight gain. Many students my age care about how they look to others. You have to be ""skinny"" to ""fit in"" or ""thick"" for boys to like you. It's always good to stay in shape and after school activities may help you with that. Doing what you love makes you more energized. Most clubs have fundraisers you can volunteer for and contribute too. You can stay up at night planning about it, making up cool ideas that'll keep you awake. Overall, no student should just sit at home, doing nothing but eating, if they have a choice to join a club. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d28a8d1d0a60,9756E31C449F,"When you might not have classes with a certain friend, it is always a good thing to see them if you have an after school activity with them. The friendship won't fade if you still get to talk to them for even just an hour a day. Sharing what you do after school makes you feel like you are apart of something. I always like sharing my stories about my track meets, practices, and pretty much everything. It's exciting to share stories to your friends instead of saying, ""oh, I don't do anything after school."" You should be happy about seeing the process you made for the school environment. If you end up in the gardening club or even a Junior Honors Society type club, you help make the front of your schools plants look pretty. People will most likely compliment you daily about how it looks and it'll make you very happy. Don't you want people complimenting your work? Lastly, not being in clubs wont make you happy going to school because you have nothing to look forward too. You could've chose between 100 or more clubs to join, but you didn't so you regret it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ceb41a00826,9756E31C449F,"You can't enjoy clubs if you don't talk to anyone. Clubs are meant to be fun and meant for everyone to have a good time. If you don't talk to people and socialize even a little bit, they aren't going to speak to you first. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+371c54856dda,9756E31C449F,"I see why some students will disagree with my opinion on extracurricular activities because some people do have things going on in their life. I understand that some people are really shy, but its always good to step out of your comfort zone. Overall though, it is hard to talk to people when you aren't the type of person too. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3cbca706d4a7,9756E31C449F,"Being social teaches you great life skills for the future. You can't avoid not talking to people the rest of your life because you have to eventually get somewhere financially or even physically. Last but not least, I think social skills are the most important things you have to learn if you want to do an after school club, because you cannot enjoy it if you don't talk to anyone. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0d4a4b54bdd8,9756E31C449F,"I agree with the principle on the students choosing at least one extracurricular, after school activity. It'll prevent laziness upon students, bring a happier environment for those going to school, and it'll help with social skills for shy students. No child or student at school wants to be body shamed or bullied for being overweight, too shy, or depressed. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+07b85a742c43,97622A00565F,A frantic middle schooler had just received a load of homework from all of her teachers. Packets upon worksheets upon study guides that all needed to be done tonight. If she had to stay after school there would be no time for chores that needed to be done and the homework. Children and parents have the right to choose if they would want to do after school. Not all parents and students would agree with having after school mandatory. Is having a madatory after school really benificial. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+65b6982a8a1a,97622A00565F,"Students should be able to choose if they want to do after school. Some students have a lot of homework already that the teachers give out, so most students are spending a sunny day inside doing homework after a long day at school and a long after school activity. Many students have stress and are overwhelmed by having too much homework and after school right after that. Most students have enough work that had to be done during school. Why push it so they have to stay longer and do more work than they should. Adding after school to the schedule will make more busy parents frustrated because they are the ones who have to pick up their child. The after school schedules does not meet up with the parents schedule and it make everything chaotic and difficult. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5aa703d6b845,97622A00565F,"Students and Parents have a routine that they do everyday but, if you add a mandatory after school it messes up the routine. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+534bc065a474,97622A00565F,Maybe its not just the students and the parents who are frustrated because most of teachers will be too. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1729f5b38f8a,97622A00565F,"Teachers had a long day of having to put up with back talk and misbehaving kids at school. They just want to go home and relax with their family. Teachers also have duties at home just like kids, but they have to grade students work and enter it into a online system. If teachers have to put after school into their schedule many teachers would be really tired and exhausted from working before school until after school. Teacher have a life outside of school just like the kids that attend school do so, it really should be their choice if they want to do after school or not. Not just teachers but faculty and staff will have to do double the work and double the cleaning from after school. Students are not the only one that need a break. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1da1517f04bb,97622A00565F,After school can affect the community in different ways. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+84a2e99df365,97622A00565F,"One way is by have a lot of cars and buses on the road while other people are trying to go home from work. The road will be filled with cars and buses clogging up the streets. Another way is that children and teens might have sports they have to be at. If you add after school they would not make it in time. Siblings have to go places too and they need their parents to drive them places but the parent is stuck picking up their child from after school. Schools should be worried if they have all of the children doing different thing, some outside, some in classrooms, some behind the school. It can be hard to keep track of them all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+467471c9251a,97622A00565F,the child should have a choice weather or not they want do after school or not. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+706306d9914b,97622A00565F,"Parent would want after school to fit into their routine, their schedule not the schools. Not just that it fits into schedule but some parents and children do not like what the school has to offer. After school is a choice because students, teachers, parents, and the community need the choice if they want after school or not. One way to help everyone is by giving everyone a choice and condensing after school into a small thing.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+89f6c2369e46,9865A4972C51,"The Face that appeared on Mars was something that all of us would never forget. We didn't know how it appeared or why it appeared, but we were going to figure it out. Some scientist including me think it was just a natural landform. Other scientist think it was created by aliens,but I highly doubt it was.
+
+I'm here working with one of the other scientist, and we're talking about the Face that appeared on Mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+55f0938b32bd,9865A4972C51,"The scientist thinks that the face was madeby aliens but I think it wasn't that it's just a natural landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+73cc5be9d91d,9865A4972C51,"It was a natural landform because the caption that we put for people to see was "" huge rock formation..... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02e65793a80c,9865A4972C51,"The face was just a rock formation that gave the illusion of the eyes, nose, and mouth becuse it was just a shadow that we were seeing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c2754be8937,9865A4972C51,However the scientist doesn't think that. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+75b1626644d6,9865A4972C51,"He thinks that the face was made by aliens. He says that there is no way it was just a natural landform that aliens made this as a sign for something. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3ac398a9e68,9865A4972C51,"
+He believes that it was a sign for something that the aliens were going to end up doing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a29aa088ebd3,9865A4972C51,But I told him that it was a natural landform because when we waited to get the best picture in 1998 all we saw was a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b113cfe34c54,9865A4972C51,"But of course not everyone was satisfied. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b36d2449d810,9865A4972C51,"It was a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7279a47ad22,9865A4972C51,"I think even though some people still may think it was made by aliens, we all know that it is just a natural landform and it wasn't made by aliens. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5aadc200e1be,9865A4972C51,"I after all did convince the scientist that I was working with, that the Face was just a natural landform and it wasn't made by aliens . But all we have to do now is to convince everyone else that it was just a natural landform. I believe that the Face is just a landform because of so many reasons. So what do you think?
+
+Do you think it was just a natural landform or it was made by aliens? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d071761bb75c,986C125C24A1,"As the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents, I agree with him ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1cee1327178a,986C125C24A1,"In the article ""The challenge of Exploring Venus"" explains many things from talking about Venus all the way to what it exactly is ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b2df4981f03a,986C125C24A1,"I agree with the author because Venus is reffered to Earth's ""twin"" and that's one exmaple for why it's important for us to know and learn. Another example in the article, talks about how it's worth the danger it presents. In the article it says ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus"" this is explaing what it causes and how it's worth for us to know about, despite the danger it presents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99149f8e8e39,986C125C24A1,"In paragraph 2 of this article, it's explaining to us readers that Venus is often reffered to as Earth's ""twin."" We need to know whats by our planet and if its harmful to be near or not. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63cde34021ad,986C125C24A1,"Venus is the closet plant to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance as well. As well as Venus being close to Earth, there's also mars which these two are our planetary neighbors, whom orbit the the sun at different speeds. Since we have Venus being around the corner at times, humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-drapped world not knowing anything about this planet. We have sent numerous people to explore this planet not knowing the dangers it presents, all though its worth knowing. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f0a203d3746,986C125C24A1,"With being said, a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Think of all that carbon dioxide we're inhailing just to be on that planet. We're going through all that because Venus is a worthy pursuit. Not only that but the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+487d5fc2a6cd,986C125C24A1,"That right there is why more than what we, humans, are used to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+49f187fb8dbb,986C125C24A1,"Now you're probably thinking since our twin planet is so inhospitable, then why are sicentist even discussing futher vists to its surface? The reason behind is because astronomers are fascinated by Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+744a38912772,986C125C24A1,"because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our Solar system. Even of the dangers it can pursit. Long ago, Venus was more than likely covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like our Earth. Even today venus still has some features. The value of returing to Venus seems indisputable, but think about this, what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39b0e9a8a0e7,986C125C24A1,"Overall studying Venus is such a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it can occur to us. As I have shown some examples how its worthy but yet a worth pursuit, I think its an important planet to know about. It's important because it referred to our ""twin"" planet, it's has so much carbon dixoide and a high fahrenheit, and lastly it still has features today that can be providing for different forms of life that we don't know about. Venus is an important planet to all and it needs to be known. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3299aecf81a,987ECCF90CE8,The claim is about other people that be hiding their emotions and the new software can developed accuracy of the emotion they have promised the applications for a variety of industies. It is a lady that is 83 percent happy and 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+42f1083368dc,987ECCF90CE8,"
+She was a subject of Leonardo da Vinci Renaissance paniting Mona Lisa was the one that can recongize emotions she was the one that can demonstrat and bring a smile to your face so bascially she was just like a computer in way ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2f5a4b6ef5c,987ECCF90CE8,Dr Huang was a smart person in the facial expressions he was the one that was trying to found out things about the human communication for technolgoly. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+82fd3eb4cc19,987ECCF90CE8,Imagine if you was looking in the mirror and you suggest an emotion can your lab partner recongize your emotion ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da83f0fa582d,987ECCF90CE8,"I would say you could but it all depends because you can't really tell because he can have a face emotion that you see him with everyday that don't mean that he happy it can mean that he mad or sad or tired. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+30855242c8fa,987ECCF90CE8,I closed this section by saying that all computers and scentist can't recongize everybody emotion because everybody is different and experience different test on there emotion ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+05b6af17d8e9,987ECCF90CE8,I think that it can be no or yes. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6def5cebc3a1,98B33A9F1D9C,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author leaves the reader to infer that exploring Venus' surface is a good idea ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+370666a1336b,98B33A9F1D9C,I believe that the author did very well supporting his claim ,Position,Effective,,,
+1afe6a49fbd8,98B33A9F1D9C,"In Paragraph 4, the author states, ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system."" If this is true, then could Venus become like Earth once again? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea094bdbfa79,98B33A9F1D9C,I believe the author is trying to say that Venus is worth exploring to see if it is able to be like Earth once more ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c657755a27d,98B33A9F1D9C,"In Paragraph 6, the author suggests, ""Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough misson to understand Venus would need to get up close and person despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges."" I believe the author is correct in this statement ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f2f2ab00cdc,98B33A9F1D9C,". If we start looking at exploring Venus as a challenge instead of a risk, it could possibly give researchers more motivation to get out and explore. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+78fd258b8ae9,98B33A9F1D9C,"In Paragraph 8, the author claims, ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."" The author brought up the word ""challenge"" again, ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0876891248f4,98B33A9F1D9C,he really thinks the challenge is worth it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+890090792105,98B33A9F1D9C,"I agree with him in this claim because if humans can explore Venus, I also believe we can go on to do bigger and better things with exploring our solar system ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d5b0462779b,98B33A9F1D9C,"The author did a good job in making his claims and then proceeding to back them up with evidence and facts. Although he had some opinions, the article was overall well written and well put together. The author convinced me, as the reader, that exploring Venus is definitely worth a few more tries. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+90f6857e4059,98B95C21BEF8,"The use of technology improves people's daily lives, especially in school. With all the technology that we now have available, it is easier than ever to learn things, and with newer technology coming out it is only becoming easier. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+46f83987ae9c,98B95C21BEF8,The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Effective,,,
+d5f5fdbf640e,98B95C21BEF8,it helps educators ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2220111bb2e9,98B95C21BEF8,"allows students to learn better, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7c91cefbdff5,98B95C21BEF8,keeps students engaged. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a115fc3f598d,98B95C21BEF8,This technology could be very valuable and helpful for educators. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3edadc2e690d,98B95C21BEF8,"Educators have a very important job. They are building the future for society, which can be very hard. Teachers have to deal with many students, and every student is different. With the use of the Facial Action Coding System, teachers don't have to worry about a teaching method that will not work with all students. In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto it says that the system recognizes if a student is confused, and alters the lesson to better fit the student. This allows educators to not worry about finding a teaching method that suites every student. This technology also helps out educators, because it works one on one with students. It's made to help every student individually by reading the student's facial expressions. As student's learning patterns may change, the system changes with the student. The use of this technology will also be helpful for teachers because educators can take a look and see what teaching methods work the best with students overall. In the article it says the system can detect when students are confused and bored, so educators can use this technology to see what doesn't make students feel confused nor bored. This technology could be very valuable and helpful for educators. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+611155e655f2,98B95C21BEF8,The Facial Action Coding system is valuable because it allows students to remain engaged. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e6c910581981,98B95C21BEF8,"In the article,""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto, it describes how the system can regognize how a student is feeling. The lesson changes depending on how the system reads the student's reaction. The system can read when a student is bored and change up the lesson. This is essential because it allows students to be more engaged in learning, since it will no longer be as boring as it was for them. The system may also help students to remain engaged in learning because nobody would be learning something the same exact way. In the article it says that lessons are modified to fit every student using facial recognition, so students would be learning in a way that suites them personally. This technology also keeps students more engaged because they would feel happier, because the system tries to keep students engaged and happy. In the article it says that the system can ready when people are unhappy, so the system would try to prevent students from feeling that way about learning. The system could really help students be more excited about learning. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fa2de7b1a66e,98B95C21BEF8,Using the Facial Action Coding System to read the emtional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it allows students to learn better. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+00931b1d9a0b,98B95C21BEF8,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto it says that the system could ""modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor"". All students would be able to get helped individually, one on one with the system. The system also allows students to learn better because everyone learns things differently, and the system would be able to adjust for every student's learning style. In the article it says that the system can detect if a student is confused, so the system would be very valuable in classrooms because it would make sure that students are not confused. The system would make sure that students are actuallly comprehending the material. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7562dcfce76f,98B95C21BEF8,"The Facial Action Coding system could be very valuable in classrooms. It has many benefits to both students and educators. It would allow students to remain engaged, learn better, and it would also help educators, A system like this could really allow all students to reach their full potential. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3f14eac2e061,98EB307EB4CC,"Many schools made the smart decision of requiring a summer project to make sure that their students are learning over a long break, as students who do not exercise their brain over the summer are known to have less knowledge when returning from the break. If schools started giving out the option of students being able to design these projects instead of the teachers, the beneficial aspects of the summer project would start to dissipate. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+40f110c27ec6,98EB307EB4CC,"This is because most students will not push themselves to learn, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3167b15c66f,98EB307EB4CC,teachers know how much work a student can handle ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bf45cff6b3d,98EB307EB4CC,and teachers know what the student is supposed to learn to prepare for the coming year. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc3c0b2262f1,98EB307EB4CC,"Thus, teachers should design the summer projects instead of students, as they know what the student would benefit from. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+d402a849083d,98EB307EB4CC,"Summer is known to be a time to have fun, relax, and be stress-free. Most television shows, movies, books, or any forms of media about summer do not talk about the importance of learning over the long break. As students in this generation are heavily influenced by the media, they do not think about school over the summer and believe that it is just a time to relax. If the task of designing a project is given to a student of this mindset, which is mostly every student these days, they will design a project that does not require much effort to complete. Their project will not challenge them in any way, and will consequently not exercise their brain properly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69dd58357a40,98EB307EB4CC,"Thus, students should not be given the option to design their own summer project, as they will not learn as much as they should. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cee4ad642429,98EB307EB4CC,"For twelfth grade and below, states give teachers a list of learning targets, based on their grade and subject(s), that they must cover over the course of the school year. The teachers are already familiar with those targets as they have spent years learning them. That is how teachers understand their subject and it is their job to help their students understand it over the course of the school year, which is why students are not excpected to teach themselves the learning targets for their coming classes over summer break. Thus, when teachers make the projects, they know how much of the syllabus and how many things from the last school year to incorporate. After completing the project designed by teachers, students will have the right amount of background knowledgeneeded to feel prepared for thecoming year ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+540496f13450,98EB307EB4CC,"In conclusion, teachers should create the summer project as they know what to teach to the students in order to prepare them for the next school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+172b9973e958,98EB307EB4CC,"A teacher's job is to teach a syllabus to their students over a given period of time. In order to do this, teachers must have a understanding in how much work to give to a student so that they would understand the concept and not feel overwhelmed doing so. In most cases, teachers have years of experience that help them understand the capabilities of student. In the other cases, the new teachers had to earn their college degree by knowing how much work a student can and should handle. Either way, teachers truly understand how much work to give to their students so that they can benefit from it ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+10214d23f3bc,98EB307EB4CC,"Thus, teachers should design the summer projects as they know how much work a student can handle ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ea96b506442b,98EB307EB4CC,"In conclusion, summer projects should be designed by teachers and not students. While some say that students should design the projects as they know what they can handle, teachers have a degree in knowing what a student can handle. Also, teachers know what to teach to the students to prepare them for the coming year, and most students will not push themselves hard enough while making the project. Thus, teachers should design the summer projects as they truly know what the student would benefit from. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ea2379c86b51,99216EEE458B,"NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft has found something while circling
+
+Mars. But what is it, they have seem to have found a face formed into the rocks. Is this new discovery actually a face or is it just another rock formation.
+
+The believers and the non-believers of the face on Mars are waiting anxiously to find out what it is. Is it a rock formation or is it an actual human face, no one knows ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8afe24c9573d,99216EEE458B,"The (MOC) has finally released the newest picture which is 10 times sharper than any picture the Viking spacecraft could have taken, and the JPL web seach has revealed tht ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+683ad46c602e,99216EEE458B,the face on Mars is actually just another rock formation. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb59c554f07f,99216EEE458B,"Even though NASA has put the picture out there that proves that the face on Mars is not acually a face but just another land formation, there are still some skeptics out there that think taht the theory is true. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3c9619ba076d,99216EEE458B,Skeptics have said that perhaps since on the day the picture was taken was a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet that the alien marking were hidden by the haze. NASA had come to Mars to take a picture of the face at the wrong time and if they were to come another day they might have been able to see that it was an actual face and not just some rock formation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbb7f9672d14,99216EEE458B,Around the American West there are common landforms know as butte or mesa and they are actually equivalent to the Martian. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+599f99081ab0,99216EEE458B,Could the butte or mesa landforms be know on other planets besides ours? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+919536dc544a,99216EEE458B,In conclusion the Face on Mars is just another regular plain old natural landform. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8a588df52ee6,99216EEE458B,""" So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even a shack."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+72a969684e12,9922F6B9A55B,I'm fore the value of using this technology to read students emotional experssions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2b9b567934e2,9922F6B9A55B,because it would be neat that a scientists can scan on a computer to read students or anyone's emotions to see how they feel ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9fb299586746,9922F6B9A55B,"In paragraph 3 it says that Dr. Paul Eckman had classifed 6 emotions which were happy, sad. surprise, anger, fear, and disgust on a painting so by weighting the different units of the software which can even identify mixed emotions. Dr. Hang predicts that it could modify a lesson which can be like an effective human instructor the techonogy can make computer animated faces more expressive, such as video games or video surgery. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d8c61321388,9922F6B9A55B,"Paragraph 7 it shows you a list of what you can do that list will show you how you can see the expression, In fact those instructions for a face that makes you look happy it is all about those muscular action units which they can indictate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. So in a real smile which it says in paragrpah 7 "" zygomatic major "" which means that the muscles that begin at your cheek bones which will lift the corners of your mouth. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0244f988059,9922F6B9A55B,According to the Facial feed back theory of emotion which is moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotion they may also even help produce them Constanin had his actors carfully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+601d4f915a8a,9922F6B9A55B,I think this idea it great it would be a good invention of soemthing to read people's emotion it could happend because unconsciously imitate another person's felling and also facial experssions. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e1a0e30c0546,995330686089,"FACS or Facial Action Coding System is a new technology that enables computers to identify human emotions so when they used it on the Mona Lisa it said that she was eighty three percent happy, nine percent disgusted, six percent fearfu, and two percent angy, in which I dont think is true ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+91d1c3f1cbca,995330686089,What I think about FACS is that we dont need it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b6fa62ac50d0,995330686089,what is the point of using it when we can just figure it out our selfs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+471bc7b038c6,995330686089,it should have been invented for something else. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5c2a42e0716,995330686089,There are many resaons so why I think that FACS should have not been invented to figure out the emotions of pictures or humans ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65dafc5f2aff,995330686089,"One reason is that they have to begin by making a 3-D model of the face in order to figure out the emotions which I think is a waste of time and the use of the 3-D printer and because all fourty four major mucles in the 3-D printed model must move like human mucles. Also it says in the first paragraph that when they found the emotions of the Mona Lisa that they say "" at least according to some new computer software"" which means that theya re not one hundred percent sure. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3895f8534c29,995330686089,"My second reasons is Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions which are happiness, surprise. anger, disgust, fear, and sadness, but then Dr. Huang has said that the facial expressions for each emotion are universal ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c6cf102943f,995330686089,which make the whole thing confusing because Dr. Eckman said six and Dr. Huang said that their are many more in those six which makes it more complex because they have to had figure out those other ones. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+242653141000000,995330686089,Another reason that I think that we can just uses our brain and eyes for find out there emotion or just tell them which is better that using a computer to figure that out ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+704ffd2c7901,995330686089,"In the artical its says "" Perhaps Dr. Huangs's emotion algorithms are different sort of "" Da Vinci Code"" which mean that they probable have not figured it out yet which can lead to having wrong answers. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9cd267e21bb0,995330686089,In conclusion I think that FACS is a thing that we do not need because you have to go through many steps which can be a waste of time and also that they may have not completed to figure out all expressions which can be tough and because we have the ability to figure emotion out our self and not in need of a computer to help us. That is why I think that we can just use us and no computer because we have the ability to do what we can do.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bd62ce07c95d,996E2B328D4E,The student don't need there emotion's expressed some like it hidden. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+732036889f22,996E2B328D4E,It says we humans perform this same impressive calculation but why would we need to if we keep trying it maybe someone will get mad and not like it because why would someone want to know what there emotions are. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+360a31dcbf61,996E2B328D4E,Computers don't need to understand what humans feel because they don't have feelings. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7281497b7b8b,996E2B328D4E,The computers are using emotions and the way we look at the computer to see if we know what we are doing if we don't the computer will make it easier on us so we will understand what is going on. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1f89c92994f,996E2B328D4E,The main idea is about the science of emotions and not a lot of the people care about there emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+047af79db147,996E2B328D4E,but sometimes it is important to learn about ur emotions even if we don't want to because sometimes we could use the work of why we use so much emotions when we talk to people or even taking the trash out we all still use emotions but why do we. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a6c17f56ed2,996E2B328D4E,in conclusion the whole story is about the science of emotions it lets everyone know if we are mad or sad even angry and sometimes people help out with getting ur anger down but not all the time does ur anger go down sometimes it stays up because you won't let anyone help you. our emotions are hard to hide but sometimes it helps like when ur mad but don't want to show it but you also want to show it because you want the person to leave you alone or put down something that i already yours. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+bea463ea6147,996E2B328D4E,body: some people use a stress ball to calm down and not a lot of people use it because they think it is for babys but some people need it if they can't keep there anger in check everyone needs to keep there anger in check if not there anger will get the best of them and then they will be getting in a whole lot of trouble from letting there anger get the best of them the best way to make sure you don't get angry is just to find something you like to do and do it then just put headphones on so you can just mute them and can't hear anything if they mess with you then go somewhere they won't go. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d363f57d100e,998A405C5352,The world today contains numerous conspiracy theories. One of these conspiracies is about the mysterious face on Mars. Some conspiracy theorists state that the face on Mars is actually a result of Alien life. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+ad54cf054f24,998A405C5352,However NASA has provided evidence that proves the face on Mars is actually just a natural landform. ,Position,Effective,,,
+946573faa465,998A405C5352,"Through advancements in digital imagery, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7e2d6ffb9990,998A405C5352,"an understanding of shadows, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c62f6d971672,998A405C5352,"an understanding that there is no alien life evidence, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b87f5396857a,998A405C5352,it can be concluded that the face on mars is just a myth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cd0b79eb2ce,998A405C5352,"Today, we humans have the access to cameras with spectacular resolution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e398dea3f11,998A405C5352,"When the face on Mars was originally captured, there was no such thing. The article explains that when the picture was originally captured in 1976, the camera quality was not great. For example the text states, ""Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."" So, when given a better camera quality than in 1976, the face on mars no longer looks like a defined face. Although the quality of the camera is a great support, there are many other explanations that put an end to conspiracy theorists. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e7686ce35108,998A405C5352,"Some of the biggest tricks played are constructed by the eyes. When the first image of the face on Mars was revealed, the features such as the eyes and nose were most likely created by shadows. In the article it explains, ""A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a 'huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c1d06d453e29,998A405C5352,the only reason the natural landform even remotely looked like a face was because of shadows. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c4f914a42c7,998A405C5352,"While many conspiracy theorists would still like to believe that aliens created this face on the moon, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1343bb592621,998A405C5352,they are mistaken. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+804cead3e8fb,998A405C5352,"With all of the technology used to investigate the red planet, proof of alien life should have already been found. Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program explained, ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size...So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" By stating this, Garvin is saying that if there was any evidence of aliens builing this face on Mars, it would have been found. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+71196b6c010c,998A405C5352,Those who believe in aliens building the face on Mars might srgue that NASA is secretly holding evidence that there theories are correct. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+71ff9c0e8c6b,998A405C5352,"However, NASA has nothing to gain from hiding information from the world. If anything, NASA would want the world to know about ancient aliens building landforms. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6195750e6aa5,998A405C5352,"The article mentions, ""Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars."" This statement proves that NASA has no reason to hide information. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+11c49a33d6c3,998A405C5352,"So, while some conspiracy theorists would like to think that aliens created this well-known face on Mars, they are incorrect. The face on Mars is just a natural landform that was wrongly perceived by the public. By advancing in digital technology, understanding the effect of shadows, and realizing that there is no evidence to support aliens on Mars, it can be concluded that the face on Mars is just another peculiar natural landform. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a16d8dcca893,99C25C797D74,The use of technology is getting advanced more and more as each day goes on. So by now we should be able to know is Mona Lisa was smiling or not. Now these days technology is informational and often true so why shouldnt we belive the results. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+09f414f0de89,99C25C797D74,"In the first paragraph its states she is 83 percent happy,9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angery. By looking at the painting you would probaly belive that because she is smiling, she couldve been fearful because she didnt know Leonardo da Vinci, and she couldve been angery because at the time she wouldve had to be sitting there for hours until he finished or he would have to start all over. In the passage tehy dop have good evidence if you studied anatomy you would be able to understand how all the facial expressions work. They even claim that da Vinci studieed anatomy which helped him paint her facial muscle precisely. They even teach you how to make the same face she made in the painting. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+70880e6f3d88,99C25C797D74,Based of the information they staed in the passage i do believe that the teachnology called Facial Action Coding System can identify human emotion. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6b768abc51f5,99EBD3D71311,"Summer projects are often seen by the student populous as a scourge upon their lives, more work to procrastinate on. To teachers, however, they are a tool which students can use in order to stay on track with their education and keep up-to-date information with. As painful as they seem, these projects are created with a significant goal in mind: teaching accurately and consistently. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7ac06d5689bd,99EBD3D71311,"Although student-designed summer projects are often more in-touch with other students, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f163685e265a,99EBD3D71311,"teacher-designed summer projects are tailored to the expectations of discipline and knowledge held for their students. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+dd031982e095,99EBD3D71311,teacher-designed summer curricula enable the student to learn and apply their knowledge suited to the general teaching style. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+224d442eb803,99EBD3D71311,"Over the summer, it's difficult for many students to stay on track with their learning, and it's very easy for them to drift away from their usual learning. Staying on-track is essential for students with good expectations and high goals; these projects can be designed to accomplish this, without any rough beginnings once the semester starts. In calculus, my teacher has very high expectations for his students. Every one of us received a ""summertime fun packet"" to work through over the summer, and it prepped us for the year that was to come: the first day of school, he jumped right into action and lectured to us as if it were the day before the AP exam. Because of his summer assignment's intuitive design, most students were prepared for this behavior, and could take thorough notes on the subject, further proving that teacher-designed projects are more useful to the hardworking student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+29a4aaeea760,99EBD3D71311,they are tailored to the unique curriculum the student will be taught with. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c82676a0cab9,99EBD3D71311,"Any good teacher can deviate from the standard curriculum throughout their teaching, and an assignment on par with the syllabus prepares the student for this ""improvisation."" For instance, my literature teacher assigned us questions analyzing a book we had read in the year, preparing our brains for the material we would be seeing in the year. Although the curriculum calls for practice in rhetorical analysis, it does not discuss proper thesis writing: our instructor assigned us work for both of these. Every dedicated student in the class was not only prepared for the work we were given, but we were confident in our abilities to accomplish these assignments. On account of the deep analysis questions my teacher assigned to me over the summer, I was more able to excel in my work in language and literature, further driving me to learn more and become more accomplished in my English classes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fcfa9068e960,99EBD3D71311,better for the student because a teacher has considerably more years of experience both learning and teaching effectively. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+473ec337900c,99EBD3D71311,"Generic_Name taught us to hold mutual respect between student and teacher; in the best of classes, this respect is still exercised and encouraged to make learning as enriching and impactful as possible. With this in mind, the teacher is also more likely to be accurately designing their projects to reasonable expectations for the student, and to make summer assignments as practical as possible. Teachers are constantly informed on new teaching strategies and the most effective ways for students to apply themselves, and it's their job to make use of this in order to prepare their students for their futures. Alongside personal experience and intuitive training, the teacher is in a much less biased position to be creating work, without personal incentives to lighten the workload or to cut corners in their answers. All things considered, the experience a teacher has in preparing students for class is the most valuable quality they hold when it comes to your workload, far outweighing the experience of a busy student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+33250b8acb7e,99EBD3D71311,"a teacher is undoubtedly the best person to be designing summer projects. The teacher's abilities to tailor their assignments consistent with their teaching style, to prepare the student according to the curriculum they are taught with, and to teach according to their own class experiences enable the most practical and effective work a student can receive. It's very important that summer assignments reflect what a teacher produces in their class. Without this preparation, valuable classtime that could be used to frontload the curriculum is lost, and a student will not get enough out of their education as they require to achieve their highest goals. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c41d3d3e2262,9A17574BAA2D,he had did good about ut he did good going to venas would be good ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2735f4ab047c,9A17574BAA2D,so most people would want to take a trip there it is way to hot to be up there by your self as well as if your with ah group of people as well but the good thing about it is that you can have an exsperance to do somthing like you better do it it would not be good to miss out the had sent a rovor up there to see how things are going to work out as well also people are want to go there but yet it is 300 times more hot then earth its self as well..that is not many people have really been up to venus..also venus is a very rockey place also you can find metels there as well and last but not least yes to get to venus is a long space traval to get there it takes up to 6 years as well. and mars earth venus are all lined up right next to each other as well. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6bcc1a0abdb6,9A1DC81E4FB5,"In this aricle , the author its trying to you take you to Venus with all the danger. For explain, in paragaph 1 it say that ""Venus is simple to see from distant but safe vanage point of earth, it has proves a very challenging place to examine more closely ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5da6c67bac3b,9A1DC81E4FB5,"its is ever challenging visting, trying to do go and rescreach on a plant where you dont know anything about it. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+805fd32da0a6,9A1DC81E4FB5,"Venus is the twin of earth, right around the corner. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aff16bdadb80,9A1DC81E4FB5,"In the pharagh 2, it say, ""humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world."" Every previous mission was unmanned. You may be asking yourself why , because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours . They belived thats why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbea89d33ba1,9A1DC81E4FB5,Its a really challeng for plant for human to study ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ec2d61ccf58,9A1DC81E4FB5,"One of the challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acis in Venus atmosphere. On planets surface, temperatures avarage over 800 degrees , and the atompheric average 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar systems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9de830c037b,9A1DC81E4FB5,"long ago Venus was probably covered largely with and COULD
+
+have supported various froms of life, just like Earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+46b798ae3325,9A1DC81E4FB5,"Venus can be save to resreach but what person would want to do at ?
+
+NOT EASY CONDITIONS , FOR HUMANS!   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+210efcc68bbd,9A5ED3C1D48C,"Studying venus can be very dangerous but that hasn't stopped scientists and astronomers from exploring Venus and studying it and having more information on that planet. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6307932fd5e9,9A5ED3C1D48C,Although you never know whats going to happen when exploring new things scientists find it very intresting to keep exploring Venus to keep finding out some of the features it has and maybe what it even used to look like. Venus is the second planet from the sun so its still very hot. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90e5ef4cca97,9A5ED3C1D48C,"Exploring Venus is very nice its diffrent from earth but also very similar it has like type features to earth like the mountains, valleys, and even craters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5483d08a748a,9A5ED3C1D48C,On the planets surface it temperatures over 800 degrees fehrenheit so it is extreamly hot. It also has the hottest temperture in our solar system even though its not the first planet closest to the sun. Astronomers are also discussing future visits to Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b2567f9d69b,9A5ED3C1D48C,They are very fascinated to that planet because it may have been just like earth at one point with oceans covering it and it also could have supported diffrent forms of life on its planet at some point even if it was many years ago ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee9377024cf4,9A5ED3C1D48C,"Astromomers also feel like it doesnt have easy conditions but its still survivable for humans they just have to figure out how they can live around the heat and diffrent things like that. In the text it says that "" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."" And the weather impediments are like some of the things we have here like the earthquakes in certain parts of the worlds and the volcanoes too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd87ef77ec50,9A5ED3C1D48C,The author did a very good job at supporting how dangerous exploring Venus is but how it also is a very cool planet to explore. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7b90d55684f4,9A5ED3C1D48C,"The author also stated this in the aricle "" Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expaned to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" Which its sorta saying that even though its dangerous we shouldnt stop our minds from exploring diffrent things and imagining diffrent things.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4f5b5815cd5d,9A79069BB83A,"When I was in 9th and 10th grade, I had to do summer projects all the time. Even though I didn't want to do them, they helped me for the next year so my brain stayed fresh. However, doing it under the teachers rule felt like working in a factory, and it also felt like we weren't learning as much as we were just doing the project. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+81e3017f20eb,9A79069BB83A,I think that summer projects should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c30b7bf9df55,9A79069BB83A,"it helps with the student's creativity level, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d63e0e631115,9A79069BB83A,"puts less stress on the teachers, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6599c40c9f35,9A79069BB83A,allows the student to learn the best way possible. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+939a7bcce48c,9A79069BB83A,"When you learn, it's best to learn in a way that is fun and enjoyable to do. Student designed summer projects would help the student's creativity level ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b053ec443c65,9A79069BB83A,"My friend Generic_Name and I were able to design our own projects in middle school and got A's all the time, because we made our projects different each time we did them. Creativity level is also key when you have to do projects for work when you get older. If you want to stand out from all the other projects people are doing, the only to get creative with your product. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56660af7a8ac,9A79069BB83A,Another reason students should design their own projects is because it could put less stress on the teachers who assigned it ,Claim,Effective,,,
+37bb213fe755,9A79069BB83A,"With all the work the kids are doing, and since some teachers are putting in more time to grade and organize summer assignments, they'll be able to let the students work and all they ave to do is grade the work. I always talk to my teachers on a personal level, and a lot of them say that making/coming up with projects are one of the hardest things to do as a teacher when you have other things on your plate. So students making their own projects would help with that stress which means that they can put more time into grading your project precisely. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b19caa739b87,9A79069BB83A,"Lastly, another way student designed projects are a better choice than teacher designed projects is because they allow the student to learn the best way possible ",Claim,Effective,,,
+15bebbaebc40,9A79069BB83A,"I always thought personalized learning was helpful. It let students be their own teacher and learn how to find information about a topic efficiently, and students learn better if they are forced to find the answer themselves. So if we make our own projects, we can choose how to learn the material in the best way, shape, or form. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16bd4b7cd46e,9A79069BB83A,"So summer projects should definitely be designed by students to expand their creativity, let teachers grade with time and no stress, and better their learning experience. Not only will students have a great grade on their summer project, but these skills that they are learning and using now will be very useful in college and in the work force when they're older. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+134fcb4a65aa,9A8B992CE622,Why should we have to use technology to tell peoples emotions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aea0ed942cc0,9A8B992CE622,"In the case of Mona Lisa i can see why they would use it there. It states that she`s 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. I wouldn`t have known that if not for tech. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+80000531a24d,9A8B992CE622,Why should we calculate emotions. We shouldn`t have to use 3-D computor model to tell the emotions of people. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+49290e7734fa,9A8B992CE622,"All we have to do is look in a mirror. Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth. Then squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling (crows feet) at the corners of your eyes. Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up, towards your eyes. Using technology produces a fake smile. We want real smiles. Besides your home PC can`t handle the complex algorithms used to decode a smile. But we can write down some simple instuctions that encode different emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0263f3c5d80b,9A8B992CE622,So all i just said is basicly saying i don`t want this to be used. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+814af4d6802c,9AA193ECC201,"The story ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" Main purpuse was to in form us of the stugles of trying to find a whay to get humons on Venus, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+f9a14bbdf073,9AA193ECC201,"Then giving us informashon of why its so hard to find a whay to live on Venus, for example Its eghat hunders degrees Farenheit, and that the presher is ninedy times more preshere than are planet. Then give us some examples of how there testing on how to live on Venus by tresing things at the bottom of the ocecn.
+
+The main reason why they are doing this is, because Venus is the most like planet to earth in are soilersiston, so if we need to we can go thare to live if the earth is going to be distored. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f3871805f5d,9AA193ECC201,So with this informashon I can conculed that this arical is to infrom us of what is going on with space trave in the fucher ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7d609761918b,9AED08D70C4C,The author had some detailed ideas that weren't explained really good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4671f93c3ae9,9AED08D70C4C,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author explained many reasons why would should explore venus such as,Venus was probably coverd largely with oceans. The author was giving nonfact statements to support his claim of why we should explore venus. Another statement the author statment said venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visits which is not a fact ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+614e8228a27a,9AED08D70C4C,"The ideas the author that wasn't supported very well where that venus is almost like earth, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e06352d6eee,9AED08D70C4C,The technology we need to survive on venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+66767075aca3,9AED08D70C4C,why we should explore venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+635d52e31a3e,9AED08D70C4C,In the article the author states that earth and venus are much alike ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6d72c8dcd77,9AED08D70C4C,"All the author say in the article is ""Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.""The author don't explain anything else on how venus is much like earth except that its has valley's and canyons. The author just explain the differences in speed and how no aircraft has landed on the planet in three decades. The author also tell us Venus reputation as a challenging planet which doesn't give a good reason to explore Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c65bdcdb3ae,9AED08D70C4C,"The author aslo explained the technology we needed on venus,cause of the planet hot surface. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+185c367c848a,9AED08D70C4C,"The author explained that the surface was over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric is pressure is 90 times greater than earth. NASA's soution to to the problem the author state is that scientists to float above a tray, then the author going on saying imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering of 30 miles or so that was not supported. One thing the author did support is that electronics made od slicon carbide have be tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface. The author wasn't giving supported deatail's about the technology to survive on Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+402aa6c62197,9AED08D70C4C,The author wasn't giving reasons why should go to Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4aa1c24a4483,9AED08D70C4C,"The author was talking about the hard condition to live on Venus, like heat and the storms etc. Also the author was making me feel like I dont want to go to Venus cause of how long the technology lasted on venus. In my opinion Venus is not save for us to explore right now but in future we might. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9125ca46a8e8,9AED08D70C4C,In conclusion the author didn't explain very good of why should explore venus and he made it seem like can ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d8baf493e996,9B55594B1361,"In my personal opinion, I think that it would be very valuable ",Position,Adequate,,,
+32e93073d212,9B55594B1361,"when your having trouble on a problem and you need help but your teacher is busy doing something or you are on your own, it can modify the work down for you. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+55b58ecd1a8a,9B55594B1361,"I get frustrated all of the time with my work and I don't alway have a teacher right there with me to ask how to do something or to help me every time i'm stuck on a problem. I think it would be great and super convient, especially for the kids who need a little extra help on their assignments. This essay also goes to show how technology is taking over the world, sooner or later there will be no going to school, it will all be over computers from home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec5025eb25f4,9B55594B1361,I think that this could really help some kids out but what if you get a text message and you start smiling about that and it thinks you are doing great so it doesn't modify it for you? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52c191a59505,9B55594B1361,"even though this could have some really great benefits to it, it could also have some really bad ones. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f16d0753dcc0,9B94E6359412,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" tries to explain the several complications of sending a mission to Venus. They provide tons of factual evidence about the geography and climate of Venus. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e692e749b361,9B94E6359412,"They give many good points, but ultimately fail at their task to convince readers that Venus exploration is worth it. Along with a failed point, this author tends to go off on side-tangents that have minimal importance to the story. ",Position,Effective,,,
+82a8223b4403,9B94E6359412,"The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" is an article about the positives and negatives of trying to land a spacecraft on Venus. He has a decent build-up into his first point while giving more and more small facts about our second planet. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c69b332d864,9B94E6359412,"Venus is likely the most similar planet to Earth, with its rocky surface, hills, and mountains, but it has much more limiting factors to deter us from traveling there. It has terrible weather in comparison to Earth, with acidic carbon dioxide filling 97% of the atmosphere and with heats of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The authors gives plenty of information about this planet, most of it relevant to the topic at hand, and therefore succeeds in teaching you about Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d070477a7510,9B94E6359412,"Even after succeeding in information given, the author fails to promote the idea that travel to Venus is worth all the cons. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a76d2c3b299f,9B94E6359412,"They write about NASA wanting to know as much as possible about one of our closest neighbors, but don't give enough reasons as to why it's worth it. With acidic atmospheres ripping through machinery, technologies don't stand a chance on the Venusian surface. With the science that we have, the most we can hope for is a jet-like expirience, flying several miles above surface so that the pressure doesn't crush us instantly. Venus is additionally prone to constant volcanoes, earthquakes, and storms deadly enough to take out machinery. Given all this information, it seems like the author is trying to deter us from missions to Venus instead of promoting it, as they planned. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0acce3f8bf02,9B94E6359412,The final point to take into consideration when reading this article is the authors' side-tangents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f3ef307aa44,9B94E6359412,"Multiple times, the author delves into a side-topic as opposed to continuing on with the topic of Venus exploration. They start off the article with two sentences that have no relation to the story, yet confuse readers. The sentences are about Venus' nickname, the ""Evening Star"", and how even though it is a planet, it is still called this. This is completely irrelevant to exploration, as everyone knows it is a planet, and the ""Evening Star"" name is never mentioned again. Later on in the passage, the author rambles on about World War II-age computers and how they functioned properly even before the digital age. Once more, this is slightly irrelevant and does not contribute to the story at all except to add another paragraph instead of focusing on the specifics of how NASA is using them to help with Venus. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c3b8efe07c4c,9B94E6359412,"Overall, this article about Venus is less than ""stellar"". The author attempts to prove why Venus missions are a neccesity, but doesn't quite get their point across. They provide great knowledge and information, despite being off-topic occasionally. This article is full of great facts, but the delivery is off and could have potentially been a better read if the author was on the other side of the argument, which has more proof to back it up. All in all, the author does not support their idea the best. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5d14e7e54124,9BEB8A30BE1B,"People all over the world use cars to drive to work or take their children to school. To most people, the automobile is an everyday part of life. But there are downsides to the extreme usage of cars. Some people are noting this trend and are begining to limit their car usage. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+80d3c057b9dd,9BEB8A30BE1B,Two of the many advantages of limiting the use of cars are ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8136bc9c36e5,9BEB8A30BE1B,it promotes alternative forms of transportation ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7490a7665f05,9BEB8A30BE1B,it also reduces air pollution. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3703b4ef8029,9BEB8A30BE1B,"In the article ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", by Elisabeth Rosenthal, the author talks about a car-free town, Vauban, Germany. Because there are not cars, people are forced to use other forms of transportation. Instead of using cars, mothers and their children walk everywhere, people ride their bikes to the store, and a tram is used to go to downtown Freiburg. Another place where transportation has benefited from a car-free society, is Bogota, Columbia. According to the article ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"", written by Andrew Selsky, since car-free day began, bicycle and pedestrian-friendly areas have been improved. For example, since the 1990s, 118 miles of bicycle paths have been built in Bogota. ""Parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up"", writes Selsky. Promotion of other transportation, such as walking, is just one of many benefits of limiting car usage. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f2baec8fdde,9BEB8A30BE1B,"""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States"", Rosenthal writes in ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"". By driving less, we can reduce our greenhouse gas emissions. ""Paris bans driving due to smog,"" by Robert Duffer, is a prime example of the reduction of air pollution after limiting car usage. ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city"", writes Duffer. One Friday, the smog of Paris ""rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world"". On the following Monday, motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a $31 fine. After only one day with less cars on the roads, the smog had nearly dissappeared. This shows that even a day with less cars can make a huge difference in the amount of air pollution. Rosenthal's article, "" The End of Car Culture"", states that many sociologists believe that if the pattern of less cars continues, ""it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment"" because transortation is America's second largest sourse of carbon emissions. Less air polution is a very important advantage of less cars. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f00b96213303,9BEB8A30BE1B,"there are many advantages of limiting the use of cars. Not only does it promote and improve other forms of transportation, but it also decreases the amount of smog and air pollution, which are harming our environment.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9821ecb7a397,9C0B44764ED8,The Facial Action Coding System could be valuable in classrooms ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a99b03a227a,9C0B44764ED8,"because it could make a sudent's work more easy for them to do because it could tell if the student is having a hard time on the work or just does not like the work they were givein like it says in the article. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+016d64a72053,9C0B44764ED8,Another thing it could be valuable for is how a students is feeling ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c4399822c820,9C0B44764ED8,lso like if the system see's that a student is feeling unhappy the system could tell the teacher or another student that this student is not in a good mood and that they might need some to go chcek on them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+533df933439f,9C0B44764ED8,So those are the resion's why I think the Facial Action Coding System would be valuble in classroom's is that it could tell if a student is having a hard time doing the work or just does not like the work they are doing and another thing is that it could help the teacher or other stundet's know that one of the stundet's is unhappy and that they might need someone help like they are haveing a bad day or they are feeling sick. And so thats why I think the Facial Action Coding System could be valuable for.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d248e3095ab,9C22F6D8C827,"As I told my NASA crew members, I told them that I had found something. Hi i'm a scientist at NASA diccusing the face that another scientist thinks it was created by aliens. As i told them they all came and was wondering what I needed them for and if I found clues. ""I think I found parts of the face that is not an aliens."" states one of the scientist at NASA. We didn't find anything unusual, except that there may be more than one of the faces. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9550a450ab28,9C22F6D8C827,"Many of the scientist are starting to wonder if this face was created by aliens. Scientists have tooked camera over and there is no alien monument after all, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7de2fb2ba2a9,9C22F6D8C827,But how do you get the others to believe thats theres not. Not everyone was satisfied ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+dd810418fdb1,9C22F6D8C827,"The face on mars is located 41 degress north latitude. The camera they had been using had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. They said the aliens marks may have been hidden by haze but some didn't even think that their were aliens marking and said that it is just a natural landform, but then again how could they prove it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8df520296696,9C22F6D8C827,"April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time ever. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orginal photos. Many anxious web surfers were waiting for the first image to appear on their screens ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4e1f9929afc,9C22F6D8C827,All they got was a natural landform no sign of alien transformation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f21d4e97ab0e,9C22F6D8C827,"Lastly, NASA had many images for web surfer to see. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2213f2699524,9C22F6D8C827,"The caption that they had noted underneath was huge rock formation. Which is resembles a human head. It is formed by shadows giving the illusion of the eyes, nose and mouth. The authors reasoned that it would be a good way t engage and attract the public attentions to Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bb285f281c3,9C22F6D8C827,What the picture was actually showing was the martian equivalent if a mesa or a landform. Which was common around the AMerican West. It reminds many people of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idoho. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of a isolated mesa about the same size as the face on Mars ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4000db5c9b5,9C480C68AA9B,"If the Summer is plagued with more work we should be the ones to design it, so we can still be an creative and a hardworking student, have a strong understanding of the subject and voice out pressing matters in the world.
+
+While us students want to be done with school and be free, it is scientifically proven that if you don't continue learning a subject you'll forget about the subject you're learning. To keep that retention ",Lead,Effective,,,
+aa864429a167,9C480C68AA9B,the students should create a project ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a4f8331955fb,9C480C68AA9B,"to keep you the students in check; It can vary from a research project to an presentation using key objectives in class to show how you used them in the real world. The position everyone should say is, yes to further have higher Graduation rates and Test scores, because if the students show compassion to their school work & their will to get things done, every one will succeed. When we work together, build each other up and help each other when needed the world becomes a whole lot brighter, nobody should have to be bogged down in a project that seems like it was made to have you suffer. This project should be fun and should make you want to complete it to show your classmates how well you did; It should also prove that you care for your work and backs it up . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9e7177656081,9C480C68AA9B,"On the flip side teachers did go to college for, four plus years and have been in this profession for even longer, so that is a great factor onto why most summer projects are teacher designed and so pressing on certain subjects. It's not supposed to be hard, the teachers just want he best for you, and have to teach you the schematics for next year or for life. It's similar to parenting, sometimes you have to be harsh to get the point through and the point is to get that student to be well rounded before he/she leaves high school. All the Teachers want to see is the students being successful and confident in everything they do to better on their lives. In short they want us to succeed to better on our lives; which is selfless and much appreciated. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+845eae635dcb,9C480C68AA9B,"Another way to choose a student project would be an voting system, a select few would pitch in ideas that are teacher approved, that way we are still learning the curriculum but in a different/ active way; After that the whole class votes, yes or no. If yes it goes on to other classrooms until the verdict is reached on if the project is fundamentally helpful and play a healthy part on work ethic. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f53e7280de87,9C480C68AA9B,"This project will help students with the strengths and weaknesses, they can either group up to get it done quickly or go solo a on their own pace. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d7fb0ac2edb,9C480C68AA9B,"Instead of laying on the couch, eating, sleeping, overall being lazy they can make that brain work as if they were still in school, I'm talking about firing all 8 cylinders and constantly learn more on a rigorous daily basis 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+acf4a22c5e3e,9C480C68AA9B,"teachers are no joke though as they work day and night to give us students the best education possible, it's stressful being a teacher and in our eyes a worthy sacrifice.
+
+Grading papers form 150 students and also having to stay on track and give out more papers is a hassle; thats why we have teacher aide's to help them get through the day which is selfless and deserves recognition ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+ce4549646087,9C480C68AA9B,"we can be more inclusive and have a battle of the brains where all teachers do a project & students do a project, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbcc47884dc4,9C480C68AA9B,"whoever wins by vote from the school staff will get a a reward of their teams choice; these are all just ways to do school work but with a spin of fun & healthy competition, because seriously work can be boring for teachers and students alike ways we can fix this on a daily basis are:
+
+Have an reward system regarding questions and candy.
+
+Play an Kahoot game on the subject to engage participation.
+
+Let students design homework or class plans.
+
+Let them grade papers and see the process and life of a teacher.
+
+Have students stand up and stretch.
+
+Ice breaker activities.
+
+Talk about foreign matters.
+
+These are just a few ways to stick out from the typical, book work and paper. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12e7956682fc,9C480C68AA9B,"Book work has dated back decades, Its time to modernize and find different ways to learn.
+
+While for decades teachers have been prescribing projects that are an inch thick in paper, we have been struggling, we need change now; Change is good and needed change is how we industrialized and now change will be how we do our tests, papers, essays & projects. We should be able to choose what subject a paper is on and how should it be done, because in all honesty we are the future so we need to work on certain matters, problems & accessions towards our future like emissions, pollution & much much more. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae9e4e5cdaa2,9C480C68AA9B,"Student designed projects will talk about these matters and open up the public eyes about how serious we, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+92d10719387b,9C480C68AA9B,"the youth of tomorrow are taking it as serious as Gun control, College Debt and other pressing matters. Allowing us students to work and talk about problems all around us would be a pleasure to spread awareness on these subjects. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2464698f616a,9C480C68AA9B,"We the students of tomorrow would love to be able to control summer projects in terms of spreading awareness/ looking at hard topics the public usually avoids. To be inclusive and attention grabbing is the goal and we can push for regulations throughout the school system, a recent matter was opening high school later than usual and getting in the nitty-gritty with financial costs & Bus scheduling. We can and will build each other up on these group projects. In turn we are equipping the mind for the real world we can use steps the we gained form high school and teamwork to get the job done, test scores & graduation rates would be higher due to us engaging in school year round. To close, we can't get anything done without Teamwork and student input, we need to let students have a say in their education to let them be the best the they can be in anything and everything they do.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a93e8219801,9C6C90C996C5,"Imagine being convinced that completing a certain task is worth any strugles along the way, and you end up severely hurt because of it. That is exaclty what the author of this article is trying to do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7de8fad704ab,9C6C90C996C5,"In the article, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author does a poor job of supporting the idea that studying a planet as dangerous as Venus is worth it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+3f07082b7076,9C6C90C996C5,Studying Venus is a terrible idea because technology isn't advanced enough ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a70e1d22aec3,9C6C90C996C5,it would take years to discover anything beneficial ,Claim,Effective,,,
+df72ec7cc7eb,9C6C90C996C5,"the costs' of this, both in money and lives, are outrageous. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+a4cf8ecb82dc,9C6C90C996C5,"Technology throughout the world has improved since the 1900's,however, it has improved on Earth and in regards to Earthly tasks. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+69db408107e6,9C6C90C996C5,"When talking about something as dangerous as exploring another planet, it is easy to see that our Earth bound technology simply cannot do the job. in paragraph 5 of the article, the author describes an idea that was thought up by ""The National Aeronautics and Space Administartion"". This idea is to have humans 30 or so miles above Venus for exploration. The author claims how this would be beneficial in keeping humans safe from the Venusian landscape. However, The author does not support this idea well, as he goes on to say how not much exploration can be done from there, and the conditions would still be extremely dangerous but ""survivable"". Also in paragraph 7, the author explains how NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. He explains how they are working on some simplified electronics, made of silicon carbide, that have been testedd in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. This may sound like a good thing, but it is far from one. This is because the author finsihes by saying that the electronics lasted only three weeks. If a computer can't withstand Venus's conditions longer than three weeks, I am very doubtful that a human can. This proves my point that our technology is far too inadvanced for such a task like exploring another planet. Therefore supporting my claim that the author did a poor job in supporting this idea. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a5ed9732018,9C6C90C996C5,"Exploring unmarked territory isn't something that can be done over night. Unmarked territory is exactly what Venus is. Even if technology did evolve enough so that humans could visit this planet, it would takes years, decades, even centuries, to accomplish ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a7ef7a4c4b16,9C6C90C996C5,"In the article, the author continously offers alternatives for exploration. He does this is paragraphs' 5,6, and 7 where he gives examples of organizations that are working towards this exploration. However in all of the paragraphs, the author seems to only be giving ""what if"" scenarios or in some cases just simple ideas that have been thought about and are possibly being examined. He fails to provide any real data or statistics for these things, except when he mentions the simplified electronics in paragraph 7. Even then, those devices are only able to survive for 3 weeks, so it would still take many years to just improve those devices. Also, in paragraph 6 the author states, ""Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus"". This statement is very broad, and it does not key in on any form of information that should lead us to believe that to be true. These details from the passage prove my point on the amount of years it would take, as well as the fact that nobody has any idea how long. The question to be asked here is, ""Is it worth the wait?"". For these reaons I stand behind my claim that the author supported the idea of exploring venus very poorly. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+779d4c8109e1,9C6C90C996C5,"Assuming that the exploration of Venus does eventually happen one day, how much money would go into it, how many lives? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+54fc90c686fe,9C6C90C996C5,"These are all questions that need to be considered when brainstoming the idea of visitng another planet. The author of this article is avoiding all of these mainstream problems by simply saying it's worth the risks, when it actaully is not. In paragraph 3, the author explains all of the dangers of Venus and how they can affect humans. He explains, "" On the planet's surface, the temperature averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Considering that this is true, we can definitrly assume that condition on Venus are severly dangerous, and a lot of people may get hurt trying to explore it. The aurthor also states, "" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oeans and would liquefy many metals. What the author is stating here is that not even our strongest materials and creations can withstand the conditions on Venus. This means that in order to explore Venus we have to design all new machinery, which would cost a lot of money, not to mention the human costs as we would need humans to test things out. He also makes it notable that venus has the hottest surface of any planet, despite not being the closest to the sun. All of these facts are serious concerns when regarding human safety as well as propr functioning of machines. Even if exploring Venus was a possibilty, would it be even be worth it after all of he human costs and money costs or paid. What we are discussing here is putting human lives at risk, and spending a ton of money on a project that is no where near being ready ready to present. These reasons as well as the provided facts assure me on my claim that the author did a terrible job of supporting this idea of exploration. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+15b46272dae8,9C6C90C996C5,"In conclusion, since our technology isn't advanced enough, it would take far too many years to do, and the human and money costs wuold be outrageously high, we should not explore Venus. Exploring Venus proves to be very dangerous, and we have proved that we are no where near being ready for such a task. We would first need to advance our technology for the task. This would take years to due, it would also use up a ton of money, and put people in serious danger. The author did a terrible job of supporting the idea that exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dnagers it presents. For one, there were not enough facts presented in the article that were beneficiary to the idea. Also, of the pros that were present, the cons outweighed then tremendously. Exploring Venus proves to be a terrible idea, atleast until we are actually ready to do it.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9c463155d935,9C88B308AF78,"At first, this face is just a natural landform ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfdcf37c560e,9C88B308AF78,"Most of the people believe that there is no alien in this world. Scientist figured it was just Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusaul shadows that made it look like an Egyptan Pharoah. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd420110b567,9C88B308AF78,"Secondly, the scientist keep researching whether is this an alien or it just a natural landform ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+573bd921d244,9C88B308AF78,"A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a ¨huge rock formation.....which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth.¨ They found this information so some people might think it an alien because it has head,eyes,nose,and mouth.¨ ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+187073b5acfa,9C88B308AF78,"Lastly, it has since become a pop icon ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d2f28ed689ac,9C88B308AF78,"It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted frocery store checkout lines. Although few scientist believed that Face was an alien artifact, and some people believed that it was just a landform ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+039d46e1c14a,9C88B308AF78,"When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orginal Vikins photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18874d1e69b9,9C88B308AF78,revealing..... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5855bef88b3,9C88B308AF78,I think it was just a landform and many people argue about this.       ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2b95b92008ce,9C88FA75BF98,"Have you ever travled to another planet? If not here are some points and tips on ""The challenge of exploring Venus."" First the planet Venus is much earth-like. It can cover large lands with oceans. Venus can support various forms of life such as moutains,craters,valleys etc... Still to this day Venus still has earth like features. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4dc94d2fcc97,9C88FA75BF98,"Next, NASA has come up with some helpful things to help people traveling up to Venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ddc496dacbef,9C88FA75BF98,"NASA's possible soultion for the condtions is to try and make it to where they can allow scientists to float above the surface. They say that the solar power would be plentiful and would not exceed earth levels. NASA is also doing stuff with the machines like innovations that allows people to know the knowledge of Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e642e2e6d188,9C88FA75BF98,"Then, The sudies for Venus are pretty neat. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ce672e6ba338,9C88FA75BF98,"The text states that,""some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the cahos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions."" Scientist also say that they think the modern computres are powerful and quick to use for studies like this. It can be resistant to the heat etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6718b1eeb580,9C88FA75BF98,"Finally, Despite the chanlleges and dangers they are all striving to meet the challenge. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+5feec719ea0e,9C88FA75BF98,"It has a lot of value to them. They want this research and all to go good because of the human curiosity. The travlers should not be limited by dangers and doubts on exploring venus. So, looking forward to exploring Venus?       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4dd3a1f9d998,9C95AF195D21,Summer projects are an activity that every student dreads. These projects are a common practice by schools to prepare students for the upcoming school year. Many schools debate whether summer-projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b3cd2d2d3391,9C95AF195D21,Summer projects need to be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+577bdc9530c0,9C95AF195D21,"it helps students retain forgotten information, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2b67e0e136ee,9C95AF195D21,"allows students to prepare for the upcoming school year, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f4441eb616f9,9C95AF195D21,it keeps students busy throughout the summer. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0dbbdf1cb6fd,9C95AF195D21,Summer projects should be student-designed because it allows students to retain forgotten information from the previous school year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1c0ac1fb2a4f,9C95AF195D21,"Subjects including math or science require concepts to be retained because they build off of each other. For example, it is required for students to remember Algebra 1 to succeed in Algebra 2. This sets up students for success so they are not lost when they enter the school year. Going along with that, teachers don't always have enough time in the year to go over forgotten concepts. A lot of school subjects go at a fast pace and have a lot of content to go over. This doesn't allow teachers to go over concepts from prior years. Making school projects student-designed will set up students for success because they have that prior knowledge to build off. When students retain information from the previous year, it gives them confidence when tackling new concepts. Schools try their best to give students confidence so they can perform to the best of their abilities. Their confidence can be damaged when they don't remember concepts from the previous year which goes into learning new subjects. This hinders their ability to succeed in school. Making summer projects student-designed will help them remember past concepts, which will increase student confidence during the school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ad7bbbec2132,9C95AF195D21,"Going along with that, making summer projects student-designed will give them an idea about the skills they need to know for the next school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0f143695e407,9C95AF195D21,"Before students enter a class, they may feel anxious about the difficulty of the class. Students may not necessarily know what a specific class is expecting from them. Making summer projects student-designed will give students an idea about the expectations of a particular class. This will reduce the anxiety faced by students because they already have an idea about the kind of work assigned in that class. Students will also get a head start on concepts learned for the next school year. When students enter school, they won't be confused when they start to learn because they already had practice on these concepts on the summer project. This makes academics much easier for students and allows them to have an understand even before the upcoming school year. Furthermore, if students are prepared for concepts learned for the next school year, it will remove the negative connotation that students have with school. Students often don't like school because it is challenging or they do not understand what is being taught. If schools assigned a summer project to students, it will help students think positively about school. This will allow students to enjoy the subject they are learning because they will not be lost trying to grasp the new concepts. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e05ab0b8b2d7,9C95AF195D21,Allowing summer projects to be student-designed will keep students busy throughout the summer. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+65d11378b710,9C95AF195D21,"Students often face laziness and boredom throughout the summer because they have no work to do. Making summer projects student-designed will prevent students from laziness and actually give them something to do. Keeping students busy during the summer will give them a better transition into the school year. Often, students are not prepared to work again due to having three months off. This makes the transition into school difficult for students because they are used to having that time off. If school projects were student-based, students would have an easier transition into school because they would already be used to working during the summer. Keeping students busy during the summer will benefit their work habits when entering the school year. Furthermore, keeping students busy with summer projects will keep their brains working. It is important that students brains are still active throughout the summer so they can be mentally prepared for the next school year. It is important for students to stay busy throughout the summer so skills such a problem solving aren't lost. Skills such as problem solving are important for student because it not only helps them in school, but in their personal lives as well. Students need to get used to staying busy in the summer because it will prepare them for a real world job. Students need to keep their brains engaged, which is why making summer projects student-based will keep them physically and mentally active. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+04f39b27ff11,9C95AF195D21,"Remembering information from previous school years, learning concepts for the upcoming school year, and keeping students busy are all valid arguments as to why summer projects should be student-designed. Making school projects teacher-designed will not benefit students in any way because they will not have the experience necessary to succeed in the upcoming school year. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4b99b34f867c,9C95AF195D21,Teachers are already trained on how to teach so it would be unnecessary for them to be teacher-based. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+02fb551cea7d,9C95AF195D21,"Going along with that, students need to realize that summer projects are not a punishment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+12dcf26ce71a,9C95AF195D21,"Their purpose is so students understand concepts for the next school year and help them develop into successful citizens. Later in life, students will thank schools for these projects because it will provide students the necessary resources to live a beneficial life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1f1a493c2bf,9CA73E4BA19F,Everyone knows that traveling outer space can be risky. Some many even say it is danergous. Others may say that we can come up with better technology to improve safety when traveling other planets in outer space. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6481af0d049f,9CA73E4BA19F,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author gives their support to the idea of exploring the planet Venus. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2ae3cc38373d,9CA73E4BA19F,Traveling Venus would be dangerous in many ways. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fe0ac4df2993,9CA73E4BA19F,"For one, it is the second planet closes to the sun so it would be extremely hot. Next, the air pressure would be quite hard for humans to handle as well. In the passage it states, ""On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" This clearly gives enough information to say that these conditions are more extreme than what any human can handle. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df0ec5532e3b,9CA73E4BA19F,A way we could be able to visit Venus is if we had better technology. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78d604f6bf1c,9CA73E4BA19F,"NASA has had quite a few ideas for sending humans to Venus. In the text it says, ""a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way."" By using this sort of vehicle humans would be able to make the trip survivable. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+990ed78de2ad,9CA73E4BA19F,"The author of this passage seems to be very open and supportive of the idea of studying and visting Venus. In the paragraph 8 the author claims, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovations."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+850b0b8ee692,9CA73E4BA19F,From this authors statement we can infer that they are on board with the idea of the travels to Venus and that we should not like dangers or doubts hold us back from being able to study this planet. Although it may be challenging we must not let that stop us. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+490a7f189aff,9CA73E4BA19F,"Although there may be many conflicting dangers and concerns with space travel, it is possible. As the author said, we should not let doubt stop us from discovering a great planet. We can come up with the technology to some day visit this planet. With the correct technology anything can be possible. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d5210a4ddbf,9CE197B2A9F9,Luke's point of view is convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ed66f0d1386b,9CE197B2A9F9,His experience with the program had opened up the world to him and he has experience some exiting events. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+983ec2da1d42,9CE197B2A9F9,"As seen in paragraph 9 it says '', It opend up the world to him"". It also says ''it made me more aware of people of other cuntries and there needs"". I like that Luke had aggread to go on the trip and that he is engoing it after he broke his ribs because that means he has a good spirit. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a814a90ca57b,9CE197B2A9F9,"people shuld participate in the program. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+b5a19d00deb1,9CE197B2A9F9,Luke's participation in the progran hays allowed him to experince adventures and visits to many unique places. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59e1b44e0130,9CE197B2A9F9,Such as when he saw the Acropolis in greesce was special. He also saw Europe and China. There took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Luke also saw Italy with streets of water. He is a lucky person to see those great places. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c91cdda2d4b0,9CE197B2A9F9,Luke is likes the program good all its good things. So i whould go and other people shuld to. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b8203dd6701,9D42FF4BDA82,"Venus id the closes planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distamce too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other times to Venis. Bacause Venus is somentimes right atound the corner- in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's armosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures averga over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times grater than what we experience on our own planet.
+
+The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furhermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames os space travel.
+
+The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularle compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.
+
+More impotantntly, researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anyrhing else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.
+
+NASA is working on other aproaches to studying Venus, For example, some simplified electronics the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during world war ll. Modern computers are enormouslt powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicated when it phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+034a13365723,9D42FF4BDA82,"Strivind to meet the callenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+1b32689176a2,9D42FF4BDA82,Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c4c782943757,9D7DC07877A6,I belive that summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5a6d541ce830,9D7DC07877A6,Students could have more crativity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3d7b17d3a15,9D7DC07877A6,expressing emotions through their projects ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cdb105699ece,9D7DC07877A6,higher grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3bf3243b77f,9D7DC07877A6,expanding their crative mind. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+966b931cabc6,9D7DC07877A6,By students getting the chance to designe their own projects they can expand their creative minds. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c068d863f249,9D7DC07877A6,Students can get creative with their art and that could inspire others no matter how hard it might get. They could push themsleves to get out of their comfort zone and this could lead them to have bigger oppoutunties. Students getting the chance to do their own project could make them follow through with it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b1c3c121198,9D7DC07877A6,By students designing their own projects they could express emotion through art and color. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1fd6cca5ffc,9D7DC07877A6,"A project could have a deeper meaning such as: religon, expreience, or something they believe in and this could keep a student by following with the project and actually finishing it. Students getting the chance to designe their own projects could be benifical to those who suffer with depprestion. They could use art as a way to cop with what they're suffering with by expressing their emotions. It could inspire them to keep it pushing no matter what. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c4323bf0793,9D7DC07877A6,Benifits could come by students designing their own projects such as getting better grades. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+69195d9c717b,9D7DC07877A6,Students who don't do their work and get a faling grade could benifit from this. They could think that the way of the teacher doing the project is boring and with this they can have more freedom and show off their creativity. This could inspire studnents to do their work. Students could follow through with their project's and get good grade's by them desgning the way they prefer it. They could feel more comfrotable with doing the project by them doing it how they want to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad3e400674ca,9D7DC07877A6,Students get the chance to explore new things and they can use that expreince to their benfit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd18f1326bd8,9D7DC07877A6,By students getting the chance to try new things they could step out of their comfort zone and get the chance to explore new talents. Within students exploring new things they gain knowlege and gain more expreince on ther project. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cf948230369,9D7DC07877A6,Students should get the chance to disigne their own projects. By doing so they could gain more knowlege on the subject the project is on. This could come to their benfit by them getting oppourtunties and better grades.              ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+137a4b2b4d21,9DADB9F1BFFB,"Have you heard of ""The Face On Mars""? If not then listen closely, the face is'nt real. It's just a Mesa that looked like a face back in 1976 cause of the technology back then. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bb96459671b6,9DADB9F1BFFB,With today's technology we are able to see that it's just another landform on Mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+21d15b99eafa,9DADB9F1BFFB,"The Face on Mars was a great mystery and a degree of surprise back in 1976 since they were just exploring mars at the time and didn't really know what to expect from it when they found that landform. Since then the Face became a pop icon and stared in multiple Hollywood films, magazines, and books. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1715078c4631,9DADB9F1BFFB,Because of the landform on Mars people thought that is was solide evience that life was on mars or that there was life on Mars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d574bcd28380,9DADB9F1BFFB,"Thus aftward scienctists tried to take another picture of Cydonia (The Face) with the improved technology and show that there is no life on Mars and that the face is just a landform on Mars.
+
+In the image it did look more like a landform ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+eb0aea676821,9DADB9F1BFFB,yet it still resembled a face so conspiarators still beleived that there was still life on mars or that there was life on Mars. The people that weren't saticfied said that The Face on Mars is located 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April of 1998 which is a cloudy time on Mars ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0d90bbb7ca68,9DADB9F1BFFB,"Thus the people also beleived that there could be alien markings but were hidden by the wispy clouds that the MGS couldn't see through.
+
+Life on Mars is possible and the Face could be real and could have markings on it but because of the cloudy day the MGS couldn't see the Face clearly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+958d356993f1,9DADB9F1BFFB,"On April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day had come and it was time to take a picture of the Face. The photo was taken with maximum resolution, and when people saw the picture there was no mistaking it for a landform on Mars. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+146908605dbd,9DADB9F1BFFB,"Garvin also added ""It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" said Gravin. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1607dfa44a43,9DADB9F1BFFB,So the Mar's Face was just a landform on Mars that looked like a face because of the technology back in 1976 and because of the cloudy day when NASA took the second picture of The Face. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a8514007c52,9DBB8B0C3367,"Now in the 21st century, the major of humans own and use cell phones daily. The number of teens who are dying or being injured as a result of texting while driving has skyrocketed as mobile device technology has advanced ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d6861e6b6fa2,9DBB8B0C3367,Texting while driving is a big problem though out the world with the death rate going up every year. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c77a89e40e53,9DBB8B0C3367,"
+Teens and young adults ages though 18-24 are texting and driving more than any other age group. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79a136deb03d,9DBB8B0C3367,"Texting while driving increases the chances of a person having an accident greatly for being distracted. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d43ae4ac23f0,9DBB8B0C3367,Driving while texting is as dangerous as driving drunk. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b5e46fd4e73,9DBB8B0C3367,"Driving while texting, as with drunk drivers, are less likely for a person that's texting to notice any signs, people walking in the middle of the road, and the signals coming from other vehicles. The larger phone manufacturers, such as Apple and Samsung, could help put something in their phones like an app, or app blocker, to help texters with their problem. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa6affcf2e10,9DBB8B0C3367,"About over 300,000 injuries have occurred every year by accidents caused by texting while driving in 25% of all car accidents resulting in almost 400,000 physical injuries.
+
+550 pedestrians and bicyclists are killed each year in distracted driving accidents.
+
+The poor habits of texting while driving would keep on going nonstop once a person gets used to texting while driving, there is no telling where it will stop. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73c423d85f16,9DBB8B0C3367,"Texting while driving does not encourage a person to care about their surroundings and fosters a sense of detachment from the world at large. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5028c2ff30d9,9DBB8B0C3367,"Constantly texting, along with nonstop waiting for that next text to come popping up on your phone screen, looking like a robot is no way to live. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+21468a91563d,9DBB8B0C3367,"The ability to enjoy life and carry on a conversation in person is completely and diminished. Putting down the phone for a few minutes each day could help with your communication skills, and your phone would be put down for once for some rest. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+386f7c09ce55,9DBB8B0C3367,Texting while driving is in the 21st century has changed the way of driving nowadays while technology keeps on advancing the problems gets bigger and bigger and while the death rate would keep on increasing as time goes until everyone fix the texting while driving problems continues.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+08dc821462a9,9DC1EE4E5674,The use of this technology to read the emotionl expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e84e6416d90d,9DC1EE4E5674,because it helps the teachers know the students feeling. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3150714ec824,9DC1EE4E5674,"When a student is confuse in a class, the technology can make it easier for that student. The computer knows when you're happy or sad. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. The same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12e7ddc8aa51,9DC1EE4E5674,"The technology is intended to bring smile to your face. If you smile on a Web ad appears on your screen. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one. The instruction are very simple, all you do is lift corner of your mouth and the computer knows the results. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50de17774389,9DC1EE4E5674,"Facial Action Coding System has classified six basic emotion- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associates each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05f5d0791645,9DC1EE4E5674,The coding system could tell if the student is telling the truth or lying. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40831e946b7b,9DC1EE4E5674,"To an expert, faces don’t lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a “smiling” politician or celebrity isn’t being truthful. By weighting the diffrient units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e9128304abe,9DC1EE4E5674,The technology can help the students get beter grades. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fcbda2a12c6,9DC1EE4E5674,The technology could make understand the lesson. This technology is very valuable in a classroom. It can read students feeling and make it understand for them. The technology can bring happiness to the students. This technology helps students develop more. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a84f17da1fb,9DC1EE4E5674,"The computer knows when you're happy or sad. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. By weighting the diffrient units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one. This technology is very useful. This technology is somthing you must have in a classroom.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+28e80c6e1164,9DC3CADE8953,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Should these summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed? Take a positive on this question. Support your response with reasons and specific examples. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+38f3b801fcac,9DC3CADE8953,Students should have the projects be teacher-designed because if students designed the projects they would be easier than if the teachers designed them. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e729a426f9eb,9DC3CADE8953,the teachers would have to make the project a big part of their grade because there would be a lot of students who wouldnt do the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f2598afa4f65,9DC3CADE8953,"The students who didnt do the project should have consequences like in school detention, and calls home. Teachers should design the project because the students should know how it feels to be a teacher. Teachers all ways design projects for the students so the students should design the project but their are some ups and down about students designing projects. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c65c2d88837,9DC3CADE8953,their are some bad things about doing projects ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+29cc2cbb9e2b,9DC3CADE8953,"students have a hard time in school and summer is the only time they get time to relax and not do anything. Their need to be time for students to relax and have fun with friend and family. Their are also a lot of bad things about having summer projects. During the summer your family plans trips and if your doing projects then you cant enjoy the trip. You get to hang out with friends and go to the fair and have fun and get funnel cake.
+
+If you have projects all summer long to do how are you going to go to practice, go to work , and go on trips your family panned. How are teacher going to give us projects if we wouldnt know how to do it. We wouldnt know the classes we would be in and how to work the problem out and solve it. You get to hang out with friends and go to the fair and have fun and get funnel cake. Family's have a lot to do during the summer and having projects would mess all the plans up for the summer. Students should have the summer to them selves to go out and go on trips. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7211c5f630f,9DC3CADE8953,their are some bad things about having projects during the summer but mainly bad things. Their are a lot of good things about having no projects in the summer. During the summer it should be for the students to have fun and not worry about school. The summer is a time when students should have to worry about school or test or projects being due. Im going for no projects during the summer they mess so many plans up.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+88f21a578ec0,9DE0959F746D,The author supports this idea by giving information how its different from today then on the 1940s. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1cebf1301ff7,9DE0959F746D,"The author is telling the reader on ""paragrahp 7"" to imagine a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.
+
+Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size with the the author wants to say every planet has is own neighbor but they got thier sapce. The author wants to inform the planet Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even thought Mercury is closer to our sun. The author claim is why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface even when Venus still has some features that are analogous to those Earth. NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humas to studt Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+68b71ba19d1a,9DE0959F746D,"The author is saying on paragraph 8; 'Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also only because of the human curiosity'. The travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovaton.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4fca53829d33,9E1B8D4EA6B0,"Out of all the plants in the universe, I didn't think that there was going to be another ""Earth."" Many perople are scraed to travel out side of earth. I would also be scared. There is one "" Earth-like "" planet. Venus has very dangerous charateristics. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+fb311ca3324c,9E1B8D4EA6B0,"Venus is the closest plant to earth in terms of density, size, and in distance. Earth, Mars, and Venus all are planetary neighbors. Something Earth is closter to Mars or we are closer to Venus, it just depends on the different speed. Venus is sometimes around the corner, in space terms. We, humans, have sent plenty of spacecrafts to land on cloud-draped world. But none of the spacecrafts have survived the landing less than a day. We havent had a single spaceship land down on Venus in more three decades. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9396c2bb49ad,9E1B8D4EA6B0,"Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon diocide covers it. The clouds are th echallenging part because of te sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The temperature is an average of about over 800 dergrees in Fahrenheit. The atmospheric presurre is 90 times greater that what we experince here on Earth. This conditiond are very extreme for us humans can encounter on earth. It also hads the hottest surface of temperture than any plant in our solar system. The geology and weather shows us erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and constant lightning that strikes to the land of the surface. Venus is a very Earth-like plant in our solar system. It is covered with largely oceance and that could suppoort different forms of life, like our plant. It has a very rocky sediment which includes features such as valleys mountians, and craters ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6ed974324f0c,9E1B8D4EA6B0,Venus has a lot of value. We should go out into the solar system and not be scare dof their dangers. I am sure that if Earth was empty and there were other things on Venus they would've been scared and would not want to come to Earth and do the things we are doing to Venus.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+52d6d455beaa,9E329AE0D772,I believe that using this in a classroom will be valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c159d9eef5ab,9E329AE0D772,"However, this could also be a bad idea. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5e3a63c958a5,9E329AE0D772,It states in the text that your freontailis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84aaca4a3c15,9E329AE0D772,"First of all, It is good to know that, because looking at old photographs taken you can see if the person is happy or not. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5648bf41fe8a,9E329AE0D772,"Second of all, the computer can tell if a student is bored, confused, sad, and happy. Which is very good for the teacher. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d53d7897f73d,9E329AE0D772,"If a student were to be confused on something that they were learning, and did not want to ask in front of the class, it would show the teacher that they need to know more about the subject that they are struggling with. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+599b10a57c48,9E329AE0D772,"Finally, It is very inspiring how the computer can tell when your actually being serious with your facial expressions, and when you are not ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e34caa38ebdb,9E329AE0D772,"I believe that all schools should try these. This will be the future, and will be good when used in classrooms. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b5f279f06cc2,9E3A10CC0A72,"For the past few years, teachers have been implementing a new way for students to be still continuing to learn even over the summer break, summer assignments. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ef9e6a59bf9d,9E3A10CC0A72,"Summer assignments are, rightfully so, teacher created assignments ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3a86ce8d8c3,9E3A10CC0A72,"are put in play for higher level classes for the purpose to prepare students for what is to come in the following year, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0ea6448c5ca9,9E3A10CC0A72,"to help them get a good start in grades and knowledge. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+b5aa484a574a,9E3A10CC0A72,"Teachers in these higher level classes spend a lot of time teaching material to students and never have enough days in the year to teach it all without cramming it down the throats of their pupils, thus creating the need for the summer assignment ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d1cb0c4eabd9,9E3A10CC0A72,"In Advanced Placement classes, teachers want to make sure that students are learning the right material and the right amount of it too, which is why it is much more teacher created and designed then student. In Advanced Placement Language and Composition, the summer assignment consisted of specific instructions to find fifteen different sources for certain topics and write short precis on each one; however, the students were able to choose what sources they used as long as they followed the guidelines. This gave the student a little bit of freedom to choose, while the assignment was still teacher designed. This method was extremely beneficial to the following year once enrolled in the class due to the type of work students were doing right off the bat. Throughout the year, teachers create class work every day for their students to help them on their way to a good grade in the class and a better understanding of the material. No one argues that students should make class work, that wouldn't be practical for the class since they are the ones learning the information. Shouldn't the same be said for the summer assignment due to it being the very first assignment of the year before the class even started? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fce066e64015,9E3A10CC0A72,"When teachers let students create their own work, it can become more of a hurting situation rather than a helping situation. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+be08f072a0ad,9E3A10CC0A72,"There are many different types of students in classroom settings, but a trait most have in common is the apathy to do homework, projects, or class work. Asking a student to complete an assignment over their three month break over the summer is difficult enough; therefore, asking them to design the project themselves and execute it? There is no way they will be prepared to come back to school and preform well in the class. Teachers themselves know the most about the subject they teach, the students take the class to learn said subject from the teacher because they don't know it yet. How could teachers expect students to create an effective summer assignment on a subject they don't know anything about yet? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+42f12c452690,9E3A10CC0A72,"In some respects, student designed projects can be beneficial. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bfb8a6b6a403,9E3A10CC0A72,"Most students possess the resentment of work in general assigned by a teacher; however, maybe if the students were to create the summer assignments themselves, put their own spin on it and make it their own to help them learn the lesson better, it could be beneficial to the teachers having that load off of them for the year to start. Students love freedom, they love to be able to do what they want and control their lives and school work, if they are given the freedom to create their own summer assignment then quite possibly, the outcome might be much more creative and interesting. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41042ac8475f,9E3A10CC0A72,"Yes this could work, giving the students freedom, but it also has been done before and the effect has been, contrary to popular belief, less then stellar. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+3e290ab29535,9E3A10CC0A72,"In Pre-Advanced Placement World History, students were required to plan, create, and execute an entire project based off of a topic of their choice relating to world history and present it to the class. It was expected that students would create said project at an Advanced Placement level skill set, that did not go as planned. Students would come into class during work days and do absolutely nothing, treating the block like a study hall, and when it came time to present projects, they had next to nothing, or something that could be done by a sixth grader. Students did not take the assignment seriously and could not be trusted to create projects or assignments on their own. When asked why the poor outcome of the project, students protested with arguments of how it was their assignment to design and how it was unfair of teachers to judge them on their skill set for that even though the real reason was them slacking off to still get a grade; therefore, it is out of question whether or not students should be able to create assignments for themselves, let alone be trusted with the task. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e53829945478,9E3A10CC0A72,"Ever since school has been in session it has been the same way, the teachers create the work and teach, and the students work and learn. Why would we change that now? Students have proven to be untrustworthy in creating their own work on numerous occasions and should not be designing work for subjects they haven't even learned yet. The summer assignments were created for teachers to get students a head start on the upcoming year for the advanced class that they were taking, it is supposed to prepare them for what is to come. The students have not learned this material, the teachers have, lets leave the assignment designing to the ones who know what they are talking about and know how the course is going to go, and the learning up to the students.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+acbba6d64ad9,9E4F43374DD5,I think that students should participate in one or more school extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+df65f0f7611e,9E4F43374DD5,if you normally have noting do after school but just setting around waiting for something to happen ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e803b81a5f2,9E4F43374DD5,"but if you were in any of the school sports you be wont be bored all the time anymore. school can make you meet new friends or get even better at the sport than you are now. sport can make you keep in good shape and good health. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf6f6742a411,9E4F43374DD5,school clubs are really fun to do because you get to some really big project and activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab130772ac03,9E4F43374DD5,"like for example theres the FFA club , the FCCLA , the confetti club those club are really fun to do. you get to make new friends too if you waned to and when your in high school if you wanted to, you could run for school present for your school and make some changes to your school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2e38c9e99c8,9E4F43374DD5,after school activity like sport can school clubs can also be on your patent reared all out throw out high school and on to college and thats why i think that student should participate in one or more extracurricular activity.        ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+11d07bd9fd53,9E61674DE1D4,"Although some may people think teacher designed is better nevertheless, student designed is better ",Position,Adequate,,,
+89d4838e4432,9E61674DE1D4,they should work all the assignments and students should work together. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e541faf4ab49,9E61674DE1D4,"student designed is better because they should complete assignments.
+
+For example, students assigns to work sience projects to help with environment.
+
+This shows that students in science class should work together with a group members to complete projects to earn better grades. Clearly, working a group should student designed. Furthermore, student designed is better because they should complete assignments. For instance, students should be productive to complete all summer homework assignments. This proves that students should help with assignments that has classwork questions to work that much stuff. Obviously, completing a assignments should student designed ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+34ca61bf3b8f,9E61674DE1D4,"student designed is better because they should complete a assignments. In conclusion, students should be best teamates to work together.                                     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+21caf665b5d1,9E93D3D95C5F,"The passage ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"" is a really intresting passage. In the text states, that ""VAUBAN, Germany-Residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneers, going where few soccer moms or commuting executives have ever gone before: they have given up their cars"". This shows, that if they have to go somewhere they go walking. Also the street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbiden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg.
+
+However, In Vauban's streets are completely ""car-free""-except the main thoroughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs, and few streets on one of the edge of the community. But car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park, and is for $40,000, along with a house. And as a result , 70% of Vauban's families do not onw cars, and 57% sold a car to move there. Because when she had a car she was always tense. Also cars causes lazyness to do stuff, and it doesn't keep you healthty. For example, when you walk you stregh your body and and all the parts of your body are moving. But when you use car you sit down and sometimes that can cause a back problem.
+
+Forthere more, all of our development since World War II has been centerd on the car, and that has to change. In Levittown and Scarsdale, New York suburbs with  spread-out homes and private garages, were the drea towns of the 1950s and still exert a strong appel. This means, that back then spread-out homes and private garages where the dream towns. In the United States, the Enviromental Protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities are staring to act, caustiously.
+
+Indeed, many experts escept public transporter serving suburbs to play much larger role in a new six year federal transpotation bills to be approved this year. Also in previous bills, 80% have by law gone to highways and only 20% to other transport ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d6d3fa05b59,9E93D3D95C5F,This means that having a car is a really waste of money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f7aa840ab09,9E93D3D95C5F,but its also important to have a car.    ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+df977877c620,9EABE5CEBE94,"Generic_Name sighed while he got on his bus on the last day of middle school, and was pretty bummed that he realized he didn't join any clubs or sports during his time at school. Even though his friends recommended that he should, he didn't really want to do it. All of his friends that joined activities made cool, new friends in the clubs they were in, and became more active when they participated in sports. He was upset that he didn't do any of those things in middle school, but decided that he would give it a chance when he went to high school. When he got home, Generic_Name thought about the kinds of clubs he wanted to join, and different sports he wanted to participate in, and was looking forward to it. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+b3c0aedbadd6,9EABE5CEBE94,Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity during school ,Position,Effective,,,
+f35512c44067,9EABE5CEBE94,it can help you make new friends ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3c7749dfd0c9,9EABE5CEBE94,help you become more fit/ stay active depending on the activity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0e89ac716932,9EABE5CEBE94,can improve your skills on specific things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a1a072992b0,9EABE5CEBE94,"If you join any sports or clubs, you are definitely going to meet new people to make your friends, which is a great thing because it gives you people to talk to and get along with so you won't be by yourself in any activities you would do after school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f4e1bd79ea35,9EABE5CEBE94,"However, some people don't like joining clubs because they could be antisocial or can be nervous and have trouble meeting new people ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a736a599851a,9EABE5CEBE94,"but it's okay, it takes time to get used to people you dont know, so joining clubs and making new friends can help you be more social and find it easier to get along with others. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+061ea7fe5510,9EABE5CEBE94,Joining sports/ physical clubs can help you stay in shape and stay healthy ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e55088ca7f5b,9EABE5CEBE94,"most sports will most likely have you break a sweat, and a lot of sports include running and jumping, and require some strength. Volleyball, wrestling, football, basketball, hockey, soccer, etc, keep you active and healthy because your exercising by doing sports which is good for your body, but you have to keep in mind not to overwork yourself because it can become tiring and maybe a little dangerous if you work for too long without taking any breaks. Sports can definitely become rough and you can really get hurt if your not careful, so it's important to get enough sleep, eat right, and stay hydrated before playing so you don't risk getting injured. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22d800b555f7,9EABE5CEBE94,"Being in most clubs can help to improve skills on different things such as art, cooking or baking, acting, writing, sewing, and things like that ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7b88fc40b5a1,9EABE5CEBE94,Some things that are provided in different clubs can really come in handy at some point in your future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9bcbcc230f81,9EABE5CEBE94,"Learning new things or improving your skills can impress your friends and family, and can sometimes earn you money. For example, if you improve in art or sewing, you would be able to sell it for a bit of money depending on how skilled you are, maybe $20-$30, or if you're good at cooking/ baking, you could sell it at a bake sale or maybe just give it to your friends or family to enjoy as a treat. Learning new things and improving skills can be fun, but sometimes it can take time and effort to put into learning new things and improving, so you have to be willing to take time into that and do your best because it's worth it in the end. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cdc2d9dc59ab,9EABE5CEBE94,"Generic_Name smiled as he got on his bus on the last day of middle school, as he sat down in his seat with the friends he made during the year through after school activities, they remembered and talked about all the cool sports and clubs they did during their time throughout middle school. They remembered the clubs they joined such as facs club and art club, and how their skills on baking and drawing improved, they also talked about the sports like soccer and basketball they all participated in together, and Generic_Name can definitely say that he's gotten healthier since he joined. When he got home, he thought about trying out for the basketball team again during high school and was really looking forward to it. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cefe1025476e,9EAD1B4831C7,"Mona Lisa face expressions are different than others face's, depending on how the person look with no smile, no anger, and no saddness. The emotional communication is nonverbal, showing the more emotion there is though our face's. Smile' are all differnet depending if it's a real one or a forced one. Faces don't lie, Smiling isn't being truthful they said. Willing to put on a face, it usually works most of the time, but not only to expresses emotion, it's tells us how they are feeling today or what they are going though ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ff1ff89a0fa0,9EAD1B4831C7,"When actors fake a smile or a frown they don't feel it really, they just make the face to prove or hide what they are feeling or showing. They act the show and give what's on the paper and have the same movement that we humans have to use when we express how we feel.
+
+We have six basic emotions. Happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and there is sadness. They associated with each of our characteristics movements of the facial muscules. ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71c38c022f69,9EAD1B4831C7,"We have some software tracks on these facial movement that our brain follows, it can find out you're mix emotion and expression by you're neutral face ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d141477de3d,9EAD1B4831C7,This not means what you can really see without the tech and just see the real feeling and the real smile or their sadness ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f9ca7393f06d,9EAD1B4831C7,"This Facial Action Coding System is identifing the moment of the face right that minute, but not what they are feeling right after or before. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+024fd45ecbbe,9EAD1B4831C7,"What I'm tryig to say is that our computers are blind and won't see what's really happening, our faces can lie to computers but not to people who know's what they been though and can see in other human their self. You got to see it deep into their eyes and smile if they are really happy or just really sad within their ife. It's different how the Da Vinci code is, with converting their specific emotoin with the new electronic code.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d2313195778f,9F0C2B822B76,"On the day of March 2, 2006 a NASA worker Sally Herring was called to be on the news show "" All about that news"", she was asked to speak with news worker Ted Cruze about the sightings/picutres from Mars of the misterious ""face"".
+
+As Sally was aproaching the stage of the news studio there was bunches of people in the audience waiting to hear the truth, but Sally was sure most of these people weren't going to hear what they want to hear because a lot of people are wrong with their opinions to this subject.
+
+As the show begun the news reporter Ted Cruze asked the question everyone was waiting for, ""Are those pictures from Mars signs that aliens were there and left those misterious faces?"" Everyone was in gradual shock ready to hear the truth.
+
+As Sally started to speak she started off talking about how people may think that aliens were the reasons we found these sightings on Mars. For years ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a0b2bbe27685,9F0C2B822B76,"that is just what people believe, they think aliens were the reason for those faces but from what NASA has to say about it, all these people are wrong. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ade8113dabc9,9F0C2B822B76,Most people don't even believe in aliens but if half of their state or city is saying that of course those people will go with the flow. But with the scientific reaserch NASA has done majority of these people are wrong! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da01ab07cb38,9F0C2B822B76,"Sally's response was that everything she knows has been discovered by her and the other workers at NASA, they have all been very curious of what is going on as well as everyone else and so they have been trying their best to do their job and get the truth! Sally finished the news show making sure everyone knew the truth and to make sure she arugued her case. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a0336f92222,9F0C2B822B76,She also made sure that eveyone new that this misterious face was not left from aliens that it was infact just a natural landform we have captured on camera and that her information was very well certified because of course she works with NASA and they all know what their doing! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+150c65faaf56,9F5DFC4C8BAE,studying venus is something that you would have to do ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+afebb7a2ca87,9F5DFC4C8BAE,because you would take a sample of the planet and test it and you would have to see if theres oxygen on the planet and how many years the planet has lived and the arthor has made a story on how they would examine the planet like the NASA would have a little space craft thing that would hover over the planet so they could inspect the ground of venus and the planet could have temperatures around 170 degrees and the air pressure will be like sea level on earth but it could be survivable for humans. venus is a planet that has been around for hundreds of years and its known for the rings around the planet and it excees over 800 fehernhite and the air pressure would be 90 times greater then earth and it would be extreame than anyone has ever encountered on planet earth. the author wrote this is so readers would understand on how venus is and how people are studying it how many cool things are on the planet and other things like venus is called the ''evening star'' is because its the birghtest star even amature stargazer would see it. venus is the second planet from the star and its also named as earths ''twin'' because its second from earth and its earth terms of density and size its dangerous because no aircraft or spaceship has ever survived more than two hours on it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4b93c7070b2,9F73A77C612F,"In this article it talked a lot about how maybe schools could use computers to sensor a student's emotion of either getting bored or losing interest and to be able for the computer to change the lesson slightly to get the students attention, But do you think this would really work? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+381b73d7c5ef,9F73A77C612F,"In some cases yes it might work for some people, but definetly not everyone. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+057d5cada5a7,9F73A77C612F,"Because some students may have diformaties in their muscles in their face, facial piercings that could afftect they way the computer reads your emotion ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1b6de5bfbea,9F73A77C612F,or even just simply you face might be showing one expression but you may feel another way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+963f558a8316,9F73A77C612F,Not everyone in the world is same so it's really hard to make something like this that would benefit everyone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1826165a165d,9F73A77C612F,"You also have to think about the cost of these computers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+234982d9dcd3,9F73A77C612F,"just think normal computers are already expensive, but ones that can read your emotion you can imagaine that those prices would be unbelievable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b16c8a327062,9F73A77C612F,"every student learns differently, so if the computer changes the way the lesson is being taught based off of your emotion when maybe the lesson is already clear to you, could make it harder on some students. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b2e7640c97b,9F73A77C612F,"So overall I believe that this product wouldn't be very successful due to a lot of the roadblocks in the way, especially with money involvment. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7c2248a623c6,9F7BAFDB7636,"Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size. Venus is a planet in the solar system, it is the second planet from the sun. It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is often referred to as Earth's twin, Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetory neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in venus's atmosphere.
+
+The difference in speed means that sometimes we are closer to mars and other times to venus. Because Venus is something right around the corner in the space terms human have sent numerous space craft to land on the cloud-draped world. No space craft survived the landing for more than hours. Beyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present earthquakes, amd frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface. Venus has the hotest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to our sun.
+
+The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particular compelling idea for sending human to study venus. NASA's posible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the frays. Srriving to meet our challenge presented by venus has a big value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human currosity will likely lead us into manequally.             ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a68adc24f50a,9F7BBA5FC646,"Teacher designed projects and student designed projects differ in many ways. This is mainly because students prefer to create projects based solely upon something they already enjoy and know. Teacher based projects prove to be superior by being both more efficient and a better learning tool than their counterpart and in turn student projects prove to be inferior mainly because students prefer to complete projects based on something they already know, then learning something new. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d58ad4f5a367,9F7BBA5FC646,"Teacher based projects can be proved more superior by using current event, historical, and personal examples. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e93907f36220,9F7BBA5FC646,In today's world students are proving to be more disobedient and disrespectful. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ca0bc0c6834d,9F7BBA5FC646,"This is mainly related to teachers trying to make students more independent and self relying, which is important, but can also be a challenge in the workplace and towards authoritative figures. Teachers are placing more student designed projects in their curriculum and in turn is showing students that everything in life will be suited specifically to their wants and needs, which is false. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5f67e4db6e5,9F7BBA5FC646,"Teacher designed projects teach students to be independent and self relying, but they also teach them to research and learn and that some things aren't always specifically based on their preferences. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7d2d90be824e,9F7BBA5FC646,"A current event example that directly correlates to this problem is the phrase ""boomer."" This word is directed towards the Baby Boomer Generation and is used to describe the independent and self relying seniors who dont agree with the way the schooling system is operated. This generation lived in a time where authority was the key figure across the nation and it was not to be disrespected or major consequences would occur. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2.9763933E+026,9F7BBA5FC646,"the years, decades, and centuries, times change and society grows either for the better or worse. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e51c57d5acec,9F7BBA5FC646,"A major system that has changed along the years is the schooling system and a major factor in this change is teachers allowing more student based projects, instead of teacher based projects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6ba9c20ff05c,9F7BBA5FC646,"This is a major turn for the worse because students are taking advantage of this and aren't learning anything new for themselves, which is creating more volatile and unintelligent individuals. A historical example that relates more to the way the schooling was before this was the Brown v. Board of Education case. Although, this was a terrible time of segregated schools it was the Brown family who took independence when no one would stand with them and they took the fight to the Supreme Court for their well deserved equality and civil right. However, it would be another grueling, sad 20 years until this was accomplished it can be believed that the way the curriculum was taught related to the way this family was courageous enough to complete this task. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4e12e03796a2,9F7BBA5FC646,In my personal experience I have yearned for the chance to create a student based project. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0d036947004,9F7BBA5FC646,teacher based projects are more informational and they give students the chance to learn something new. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dbdfe6571419,9F7BBA5FC646,A direct example of this would be when I was issued a student designed project my tenth grade summer and at first I found it interesting until I received a hundred percent on it. This made me realize that I wasn't learning anything by doing this student based project and that it was more important to create something more challenging and less suited for my taste. I thank my teacher for this opportunity to learn about the major differences in teacher and student based projects and for the chance to learn more efficiently. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+72059e437108,9F7BBA5FC646,Teacher based projects prove to be superior according to many people. They are also a better learning tool and they create a more efficient learning environment for students. Without these projects students would be less obedient and wouldn't show as much respect to their authoritative figures. These projects are able to play a major factor in the curriculum taught by the schooling systems. And they are important to the growth of young individuals.  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6793e7e0295a,9F83C5864EB0,Here's why the author thinks Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus could of once been a Earth like planet ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d52da42def81,9F83C5864EB0,"Venus is same size in density, and size as Earth. The planet had rocky sediments, craters, valleys, and mountains. But nobody can visit or get a up close look to venus because it has a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide, highly corrosive clouds of sulfuric acid in its atmosphere. The weather is extremely hot the average temperature is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we are experiencing right now on earth this is stronger than any sea level on earth. If we were to have another pursuit to Venus it would not be efficient because we dont have the right equipment to survive on that kind of journey ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+797061fe148f,9F83C5864EB0,"No, the author did not evaluate his idea good enough there wasn't enough supporting details to support his claim ""Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents"". ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0863cc57c20b,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"A student presents their self-designed science project: it is a box of dry ice and a research paper on the properties of the peculiar substance. The project has a valid topic, but it is almost irrelevant to the curriculum of the class. A month later, the student realizes that the summer project should have been some sort of a review of the graphing unit last year---which they had forgotten completely. A summer project is meant to preserve the necessary knowledge from the year before and to prepare the student for the upcoming year. If the project's design includes and practices irrelevant information, then its purpose is completely undermined. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8f9e302703c9,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"In order to avoid this, a summer project should be designed by teachers instead of students ",Position,Effective,,,
+63afb1370361,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"they know the curriculum well, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+290b8de8e9cd,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"will take it seriously, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5daab7d71d68,9F9FBC5BF6B3,can use it as an opportunity to set the expectations for the upcoming school year. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4a671dd02d03,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"It is most logical and effective for a teacher to design summer projects. As the people who teach the class, teachers are the ones who will know what skills the students must practice in order to succeed in the class.
+
+Therefore, there is no one better fit to prepare the students than the teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc842970b8ad,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"Through observation, it can be seen that the majority of the teen population does not stay ambitious or dedicated to school during the summer time. Due to this, it makes no sense why teachers would trust students to dedicate their time and effort into designing a well-thought out project instead of dismissing it so that they may enjoy their summer. Teens want to forget about school as summer time comes around, they do not want to spend it preparing for more school. For instance, if a student has the choice between an easy project or a truly helpful, but complicated and tedious project, observation shows that they are most likely to choose the easier option. Teachers should design the project because they would not be as tempted to simplify the project for the sake of their own self desires like students may. In the earlier situation, teachers would most likely choose the harder project because they know it would benefit the students in the long run. Since teachers would be more responsible and serious with the project, they are the ideal designers for it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bd0e3e44543a,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"For example, a highly detailed and extensive project would indicate a rigorous class. The projects are an opportunity for teachers to introduce and exemplify the expectations of the students---in this case, high expectations. This sneak peek into class life would hopefully prevent unpreparedness from students and help the class run more smoothly. Teacher-designed projects have also been shown to benefit students by preventing a switch of classes during the school year: a junior at Generic_School decides to switch out of her Spanish 5 class during the summer after attempting the summer assignment. If it were designed by the teacher, it would be just like assignments from the class itself. This demonstrates the advantage of having the opportunity to work on an assignment that mirrors the work done in a possible class: a student essentially gains the ability to do a test run to see if they like it or not. That junior would have gotten stuck in the class and performed poorly if it were not for the summer assignment. Therefore, summer assignments should be designed by teachers to give students an idea of what to expect and what is expected of them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+be1671565fd7,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"Teachers are the best fit to design summer assignments for students because, unlike teens with only fun and relaxation on their minds who would not take the project seriously, teachers can create an assignment that will prepare the student for the specified curriculum and demonstrate what they expect from them. This should have tremendous benefits when it comes to student preparedness, class switches, and student success. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+30e56fc524d3,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"A student-designed project may sound like a good idea because it opens up the opportunity for students to be creative and show what they know, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e3568d0b0f0b,9F9FBC5BF6B3,"however, in reality, most students simply will not put enough effort into it. Perhaps if teenagers were more passionate about school during the summer it would work, but until then, teachers remain the best candidate for designing summer assignments. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+3e01fea0fb85,9FAA72C47BB0,"Mona Lisa, when you hear her name you think of a women that doesnt look fazed at all, she looks like she has no emotion. Mona Lisa does, thanks to studies Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute foe Advanced Science found a way to tell emotion. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+97f2f76f94a3,9FAA72C47BB0,"In Paragraph 3 the text states that process begins with 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a58f9992f29,9FAA72C47BB0,"In Paragraph 4 the text states the use of Video Imagery is what helps find the emotion new emotion-recognition software tracks thses facial movements. When a friend is feeling down you can tell in there face and how they act around you. when they stops talking your friend might be sad they want to cry or irratated sometime they dont want the be bothered. Also a person can be happy when they smile, laugh, or joke with you. you can tell fear when a person or friend eyes open, and when a they are speachless. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77f04ca14b3c,9FAA72C47BB0,Science can unlock and find a lot of new things and emotion is one ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+74e6b14a9c59,9FAA72C47BB0,be happy and never hide you real emotion cause science will get you. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4d09e6e53933,9FBD2D259388,Being able to detect how other people are feeling can be a satisfiying and critical thing to use or to know ,Position,Adequate,,,
+11d8af24f4fd,9FBD2D259388,"When the historical and famous picture that was taken of Mona Lisa famouse painting with her smiling can be a miss lead consuption or an unexpected photo at the time. With the FACS it was able to detect Mona Lisa's expression through the photo. She was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4f1905feb223,9FBD2D259388,"The FACS isnt able to detect what Mona Lisa was happy, upset, angry, disgusted or fearful at the time. The only thing it was able to capture are her feelings but not towards what she was feeling for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+78e6562cc40b,9FBD2D259388,Being able to know that the person that you are analizing can have certain emotion's towards you or towards others is a good thing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+661ea33797cb,9FBD2D259388,"If you were to have a significant other or some one that you are intrested in is sending mix signal can be complicated and people wouldn't be able to tell, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31b9e97cbd61,9FBD2D259388,"it can be usefull but, can also be a disadvatage ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0a1b6f4faa80,9FBD2D259388,There are people who tend to be complicated when they aren't wanting to. It would be easy tp know if there were to be a detected FACS. But how would it be for sure that it was towards that one specific person. For instance in the Mona Lisa picture/painting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23823735ad8c,9FCF0C8C83C3,After reading the passage I came to the conclusion that some ways I think it's not valueble ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a0462b393e68,9FCF0C8C83C3,FACS would be a smart tool for case workers or counslers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5bb50e845ea,9FCF0C8C83C3,"Some case workers deal with people who have emotion diseases such as post dramaic stress diseases in that nature . I feel like the creator could've made the tool for more serious reason, not that the emotion FACS was pointless but who would want to just find out their emotion and they can already feel it or going through it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36b6a1c7c689,9FCF0C8C83C3,"I feel like people would want to find out things more important like , whats going with that person , is the person feeling sick , is the person healthy . FACS could been about how's the day going to go , whats the weather going to be like ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c10bb7c23d63,9FCF0C8C83C3,I feel like FACS is all hype in some way because it's basic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9943a7114332,9FCF0C8C83C3,"They took all this time and objects figure how someones doing or feelings , instead of how we're living . Anyone can figure out someone's emotion expresses by their body language , their tone , how their speaking , when their speaking and etc. Often people may not want to speak on how they feel , alot of times teens want to keep their problems and emotions to them selves ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebba12c34ba1,9FCF0C8C83C3,"Students are diffrent from adults, and also handle emotions diffrently. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec5dd131b50c,9FCF0C8C83C3,"FACS would be valueble if they come with conclusions to that person emotion at the time , plenty of ways technology can do things. If the FACS were a solution to a person with a bad day it would be valueble. Due to the fact their making this like it's a cool invention when FACS is exposing peoples feelings and then wat after that? I feel like the FACS should be upgraded and do more with it . ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d8b4cda5222,9FE9D9EB5111,"As the times have progressed, cell phones have become extremely prevalent in the daily lives of many. To add on, cell phone usage has also increased substantially. From playing music in the shower to using phones to keeping daily tasks organized, cell phones have grown to become an essential part of human life. It is hard to deny that cell phones have become so infused in our daily lives. This has caused many to pose the question as to whether or not cell should be allowed to be used in any capacity when operating a vehicle. While a total ban of cellphone usage may seem unrealistic,using a phone at any capacity not only poses a threat to the driver or the passengers but also other drivers on the road ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1a470ac29959,9FE9D9EB5111,"Due to the risks posed by using a cell phone when driving, cell phones use should be banned when operating a vehicle. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2f2ebb2a947b,9FE9D9EB5111,"To begin, cell phone usage when driving can cause a major distraction to the driver who is operating the vehicle. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d31e4e666a1,9FE9D9EB5111,"All cell phone users can vouch that having a cell phone comes with understanding that there are a plethora of different applications going on within that minuscule device. Loud notifications from social media sites and vibrating text messages from friends and family, even though they may seem important, are all distractions that come with having a device. When someone is distracted, their reaction time when operating the vehicle becomes impaired which poses a threat to everyone on the road, even if they are just a passenger. If cell phone usage is banned from drivers, it would not be the first time or first ""place"" that cell phone usage has been barred from. Cell phone usage has been restricted or banned from vital places such as school and the workforce. This is all for the reason that it can alter that particular person's effectiveness when trying to conduct or produce work. If cell phones are not allowed in these places because they distract people so greatly, why should they be allowed when someone is operating a car that weighs a few tons? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e10c726d87c4,9FE9D9EB5111,Some may argue that cell phone usage should be allowed by drivers when operating a vehicle with certain restrictions. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fb3cd8abd245,9FE9D9EB5111,"However, once drivers feel like they have the go ahead to use their cellphone in any capacity, some may still try to go above and beyond to break the rules. Using a phone at any capacity poses a huge risk for all people on the road. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+057486d9fe48,9FE9D9EB5111,"Moreover,using a cellular device in a car is not necessary. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc186035344d,9FE9D9EB5111,"According to a study conducted in 1995, only 13 percent of the United States population owned cell phones. This statistic goes to prove that before cell phones became widely popular; people were able to operate vehicles without it. Some may argue that phones provide GPS services that assist in getting drivers to their destination,which by all accounts is true. However, phones aren't the only devices that provide GPS services. There are actual GPS devices that prove way more accurate than cell phone applications. Also, these GPS devices pose way less of a threat when it comes to distracting drivers as they are strictly meant for giving directions instead of having multiple purposes. If drivers have some kind of emergency such as a death or injury in the family, drivers can pull into a parking lot or pull over on the side of the road in order to communicate with whomever they need to communicate with. There is no acceptable reason as to why one should be using their cell phone while operating a vehicle. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dc6109c7751f,9FE9D9EB5111,"Lastly, when operating a vehicle in general you have the ability to kill someone due to your attention being impaired. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ff072c53e09a,9FE9D9EB5111,"When adding a person using a phone while operating a vehicle, the risk of killing someone increases. When operating a cellphone while driving, the drivers eyes can be taken off the road from anywhere to a few seconds to a few minutes. Driving is not a perfect situation. People constantly break,stop, speed up, and slow down. Taking eyes off the road for even one second can cause a serious accident on the road. The president of the National Safety Council reported that talking on a cellphone while driving makes one four times more likely to get in a crash. Talking on a phone is such a risk that the National Safety Council has called for a total ban on cell phone usage when driving due to the fact that 100 million people use their phones in a day. Using a cell phone when driving can not only jeopardize the drivers life but also passengers in their car and others on the road. Driving while using a device has the ability to cause a premature death when the drivers are distracted. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3476b414264e,9FE9D9EB5111,"Cell phone usage when operating a vehicle at any capacity is extremely dangerous. This kind of activity poses a threat to not only drivers themselves but passengers and also other users of the road. Cell phone usage when driving can cause drivers to be distracted which in turn if not careful can cause a car crash that leads to serious injuries or death. Furthermore, cell phone usage in a car is not essential and drivers do not need it in order to drive. There is no reasonable explanation as to why cell phones should be used when driving. Laws need to be enacted in order to ban this unacceptable behavior and protect road users. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8267e8b955da,9FECD0D50903,i think its dumb and i do not agree because its dumb no one likes extra stuff in school because its boring ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0916810f09d4,9FECD0D50903,extra activities are boring because its to extra because its extra and boring. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ec7b4dcb0fdb,9FECD0D50903,its boring just because its boring and no one likes it. just because noone likes it . extra activities are boring because its to extra because its extra and boring. its boring just because its boring and no one likes it. just because no one likes it . extra activities are boring because its to extra because its extra and boring. its boring just because its boring and no one likes it. just because no one likes it . thats all the reasons its boring and i think its boring because it is boring ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49de3432619a,9FECD0D50903,there should be less activites and more time for home ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8c1b7034ed2,9FECD0D50903,because its better for u then school . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+584e128c3db1,9FECD0D50903,. if there gonna add a activity it should be for teachers to learn how to teach students ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d9db7128f5a0,9FECD0D50903,because no teachers accually teach all they do is ¨oh write this oh write that and ill grade it ¨ they clearly dont know how to teach so they should learn in my opinion like go back to teaching school and thats facts. only teachers ive seen that know how to teach are civics/ history teachers everyone else dosent know anything about how to teach in the school system and need reteached on how to be a teacher ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c39958653d31,9FECD0D50903,with a extra activity it makes no sense for that to happen. the principal would just be wasting his time because it would be nothing anyone likes because noone likes school so why have 1 extra thing that just makes no sense . ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+07b97868e9d7,9FFC1CFE7CD9,"Although summer is considered as a break from school, it is a rather perfect opportunity for students to continue working on assignments in order to keep the ideas they learned over the course of the year fresh in their minds before they head back. To do this, many schools are adopting mandatory summer projects for students to complete before their next school year will begin. These projects will stimulate critical thinking and sharpen the skills that students have learned in their previous year. Although many parents think that teachers know the capabilities of their student, which is why they should be the ones to design it ",Lead,Effective,,,
+113b15e682d5,9FFC1CFE7CD9,it should be student designed ,Position,Effective,,,
+b38171437f35,9FFC1CFE7CD9,students are more likely to understand their peers' schedule and difficulties in the content, ,Claim,Adequate,,
+ce4b60c61760,9FFC1CFE7CD9,"Even though many teachers claim that they are very close with their students, in truth, they do not know much about what their students do. During the summer, aside from going on family vacations and other recreational activities, many students have responsibilities like volunteer work, internships, jobs, taking care of siblings, and etc. that take up a lot of time out of their day. Teachers do not know a student's life outside of academics and will therefore not consider these aspects of their life. As a result, teachers will most likely design a project that could be very time consuming and strenuous for students. However, if the project is student-designed, it would be designed knowing that students have other responsibilities outside of of academics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cc408395f7bc,9FFC1CFE7CD9,"With the schedule of a student in mind, the project will be designed in a way that will be evenly spread out content wise, with enough time to complete each assignment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+222bb9239610,9FFC1CFE7CD9,"Although teachers argue that they have taught for many years and they know the weak points students have for certain topics, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d1f8e89536ac,9FFC1CFE7CD9,they are all basing it off of statistics ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c22959dd9330,9FFC1CFE7CD9,"Just because students on average found a certain topic difficult does not mean that all will; and some will find a different one difficult. By gathering a group students, the students will be able to pin point which topics are easy and which will require more explaining. Additionally even if teachers were able to successfully identify which topics are troublesome for students, they will not be able to solve the issue present in the most simplest way. Recently the demand for tutors is growing and the reason is that is many of these tutors are young. They have only recently finished their studies. But most importantly, their age gap between their tutees, the students that tutors help, is a measly couple of years, compared to the decades of years between students and teachers. Because of this minuscule age gap, these tutors understand a student's difficulties better. They have gone through the problems that their tutee is going through very recently. As result of this, unlike teachers who will provide a lengthy explanation that was told to them by their professors many years prior, tutors will explain how to solve these problems more efficiently and accurately. Similarly, that is why students, knowing where their peers' difficulties lay, will be able to able to create assignments that are specifically targeted towards students and their success in the content. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+55e03b37f293,9FFC1CFE7CD9,"With these summer projects, students will successfully master their acquired skills from the previous year and get a head start in their studies for their year to come. Due to this, students will face a smooth transition from their prior grade to their next. Additionally, by making these projects student designed, the projects will not interfere in their day to day activities during the summer and will provide assignments that will efficiently target students' weak areas and strengthen them. Both of these goals will be met by including enough time each assignment and including easy to follow videos, created by students, explaining difficult topics. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+050887b85715,A02D5B12D66D,"Well, I suppose it coud have been made by aliens ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6e7f8936ec57,A02D5B12D66D,"but as we continued to research it. It became known to us that something was casting a shadow as we said in our article about the ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a80ea24798ed,A02D5B12D66D,"NASA
+
+releasing it in the hopes while it was coming to public. To sale in stores and area in business ,and it did. Hoping it to be real so we can lead people into the existence of it being real. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ffe14eda971,A02D5B12D66D,"But noticing ourself that it wasn't true that it wasn't real. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+2ad8be9e0792,A02D5B12D66D,Sadly for us as believers of life on other planets and creation of art from other living things. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ec60b963c5c2,A02D5B12D66D,"In April 5, 1998 when we snapped some pictures ten times as better than the Viking did we notice that it was just a landform a big rock formation. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5041b651ec83,A02D5B12D66D,"The location of the Face of Mars is 41 degrees north martian latitude where it is winter in April on Mars very cloudy during this time so lots of winds,and dust blow past and covers the rock formation. The picture actually just shows us that is just like a regular formation on Earth as said in paragraph 12 ,and also looking identical to landforms in the American West area. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+593e87baebeb,A053080C69A4,"Our nation could use Facial Action Coding system, It could better our nation a a whole, that we can dectect when a person is scared and angery, and upster. it could help, us at boarders, and when we let rugees come to our country, to see if they are actually here to be saved or here to hurt us, that way we can better as a country, and a nation ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bb89b7f8e00f,A053080C69A4,i dont think its need in our schopols ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d6727c99d1e7,A053080C69A4,"what can school childern do, we would all be constantly, have the disgusted, or have a sadness look on our faces ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4d1679854d93,A053080C69A4,"the school wouldnt be happy, but its our emotion, it shouldnt matter what our emotions are, the schools dont control us, we are humans, we are the next generation ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+754bdcd6091e,A053080C69A4,we should be able to pick and choose what's in our schools ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dd9c1133aae4,A053080C69A4,"we have to deal with whats goes on inside our schools, weather we aren't smart or not, we deserve that right, our parents, the law makers, dont know what we goes on in our schools, or how we feel about, the standard testing, why should be garde on stuff, our parents dont know, we shouldnt be forced on tests, that decides if we graduate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4729c3a8dc63,A0D96DEF2ADA,"So you want to do a extracurricular activity? If you want to do an activity, There are many different thing to do like Sports,Yearbooks work,or serve on the student council. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5bb418a64d52,A0D96DEF2ADA,"So i say you should go and get a extracurricular activity it would be fun! 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+ed45234473f2,A0D96DEF2ADA,"There are plenty of sports like Basketball, Track, Soccer, Baseball, Football its endless. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4dc81a0ed2e7,A0D96DEF2ADA,as you play sports it would be enjoyable ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24c7a82d2a04,A0D96DEF2ADA,"I went to play basketball and i had a blast it was fun to play with my friends and me However, let's say you don't like basketball and you would rather prefer Track You can do that! track can help you in different ways like your running. Track is also entertaining as well There is also football who does not enjoy football it is a sport that i love to watch,play etc football is a excellent sport because 1 It can make your body healthy and fit. 2 If your extremely good at the game you can make a lot of money off it. thats why you should play sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6741fdcc7ebe,A0D96DEF2ADA,"What if you want to do yearbook, the yearbook could be a excellent idea ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66033aa2e389,A0D96DEF2ADA,you can take pictures also have all your friends in the yearbook and take pictures of them with you making memories with them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c859a8156d3,A0D96DEF2ADA,Also there are reading clubs i you love reading this is the right club for you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1478f51d9ebd,A0D96DEF2ADA,reading you can explore different books and the adventure could be exciting for you and others with this club to the libraries that can show new books could make your jaw drop because they know you would love the reading club it will be awesome. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4df8d82541a,A0D96DEF2ADA,"If you don't want to do any of those you can serve as the student council, as a result you will have to council others. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0e8e3333387,A0D96DEF2ADA,"And you can try to help anyone that needs help you can understand students better when someone has a problem you can try to help them fix it, make things easier with them to support them with thing that can make them happier. Also it can make you just as happy as them because you the one who is helping them to just be kind and nice is the best feelings ever to make someones day can boost your confidence and theirs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+289dc3a8726f,A0D96DEF2ADA,So if your ever trying to decide what extracurricular you want to do these are some that can get you into the activity you would want to do.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e7124ba1148,A0DEA37279E9,I think we should use this technology ,Position,Adequate,,,
+391f12158c8f,A0DEA37279E9,"it say in the article that ""a classroom computer cand recognize when a student when a student is becoming confused or bored ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+011b6471bb5a,A0DEA37279E9,"This technology could make the lesson easier, some people don't like to ask for help from teachers for certain reasons, with this new technology you won't have to and it will make life so much easier. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d5dcb8187f1,A0DEA37279E9,"They use video imagery the software tracks the facial movements. The painted face of mona lisa by tweaking diffrent units the computer can identify mixed emotions. every expression is compared against a face, The demonstration could bring a smile to your face, for example. If you smile when a AD appears on your screen the computer will bring up another AD that is similar to the AD your looking at right now. But if you frown the next AD won't be the same. According to the facial feedback using your facial mucsles doesn't only express human emotion they also help produce them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c842b7c66d1,A143BE759AD2,"After reading this article, I have grown a nutreal side of this topic. The reason why is becuase I found a liking for the discovery, but there is also some things that I dislike as well ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+de95498b3de6,A143BE759AD2,"This tech can become useless and useful in many situations. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a6dbc85ee655,A143BE759AD2,One reason why this is a good piece of technology is for court cases or things such as that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2448f25b52e4,A143BE759AD2,"People could check if a persons emotions are set of fear, anger, sadness, and other emotions as well. If this technology becomes advaced we could see if a person is lieing just by their facial actions. This could help court cases become justified and more crimes solved. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04c903da6776,A143BE759AD2,A reason why this is bad is due to people and their privacy. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7c9bd1c65151,A143BE759AD2,"I would like it to be scanned just to see my emotions, many people would agree with me on this as well. People who could get their hands on this could use it too much or go over the top with this tech. Also, since there is people who probobly don't like this type of technology, they would throw a fit it they would have to use it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf153317eb5e,A143BE759AD2,Also another reason why this is bad is the portablity of this technology ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0ac6f541dc45,A143BE759AD2,"For this to work they would need a high end computer to check someone, and not everyone can just wheel in a computer like that and check someones emotions out of the labatory. This technology is usless without a lab becuase you need a lot of tech to do this expierment on someone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+edcd19232cd0,A143BE759AD2,"
+Another reason why I partly side with this technology is for old painting, such as this article explains. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a508da3de39,A143BE759AD2,"The artcile talks about finding the emotions of one of the most world wide known paintings in the world, the Mona Lisa. We could find out people emotions from years ago, dating back from the first detailed paintings. This could also work on not just paintings, but old photos. Imagine seeing what emotions people had in pictures from World War 1 or other wars. Seeing this could bring a new sight into history. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34a4db137455,A143BE759AD2,"
+One of my most favorite reasons why we need this is for classrooms. Many people get bored in school, so this computing could help out. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+641793424902,A143BE759AD2,"The article claims that it could tell if a student is bored or confused, and could change the way the lesson is in seconds. This could help kids out with learing and could future their education. But with that computers would have to understand if a student is making a face to confuse the computer into thinking the kid is confused or not, because we all know that one student that would play with the computer to mess up peoples education for the day. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d467c0050e24,A143BE759AD2,Another bad reason for this is becuase people could fake their emotions ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0baae909fa23,A143BE759AD2,"Many people know how to act on stage, so they could easily do that to a computer to fake their emotions. This could trick computers to doing things that it really shouldn't. This means that this technology could become tricked, making it usless in many situations ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f62e1dbf07f6,A143BE759AD2,A good reason for this is for advertising. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70ef13ab82ab,A143BE759AD2,"The article states that ads can be modifyed to show things that make you happy and could make you purchase it. If you see a ad you don't like you won't get ads like those anymore, insted it will supply ones that will possibly make you happy, if you still don't like those ads, the process will repeat will you do find a interesting ad. This could lead to higher sales, but also lower sales. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abd3401e573d,A143BE759AD2,"Lastly, my final reason is how hard it will be to access this tech. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b4b31f0d0aa8,A143BE759AD2,It states in the article that a home PC will not be able to handle to algorithims to understand facial emotions. Many people will not be able to expirement with this nor use it at all. So this technology will not be know to the public unlike other technology. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02a7a3acecf3,A143BE759AD2,"All in all, this technology will recive mixed opinions, manly due to the fact that people will not be able to get their hands on it unlike phones, laptops, PC's, and consoles. This item can be very useful, but needs to be polished to be absolutely useful in every situation. This technology will grow as long as they work hard enough to make this tech one-hundered percent useful in this world. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e70c2091203,A156FB0E388E,The author suggest the reader to study Venus isnt directly in the text but he/she gives you the idea that you should look into it. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+38689bd54c2d,A156FB0E388E,Throughout the article the author talks about Venus and others planets in out solar system. but he mainly talks about Venus and Mars. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+adeb14789b20,A156FB0E388E,"The author tells us that Venus isn't actaully a Evening star, it just has that name because it is closer to the sun. Venus is also referred to as Earth's ""twin"" because it is the closest planet to us in density and size and sometimes distance. In the text it says ""Venus can be right around the corner in space'. Even though Venus is right around the corner we have still yet to land an actually spaceship on it. There hasn't been any space craft the a has been successfully on Venus for more than a few hours.. Although in paragraph 6 it says ''many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to long enough to contribute meaning to our knowledge of Venus ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49908905a95c,A156FB0E388E,This is tell us that there is still stuff to learn about mars and this story isnt complete.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+073222e12335,A157CD4FC4C8,the reason why their is the techonoly of people to know how to understand on how the reason the potrites are in this world today. By showing on how the way the pictures in the text is showing how she is smileing. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4ace0f3303da,A157CD4FC4C8,I think we should leave her face the way is orginally on the way it is from the way the arginol person painted it. It is being very respectful on how the painting is being displaied in different musemes here around the world. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2bab0c916fdd,A157CD4FC4C8,the reason why I think this is because lets say that we painted something and someone goes in and paint it completely different. Than what you made it to be in the first place. So I feel like we all should leave things they were when they were created. The respect we give we get in return from the same reson y we gave it to others because the more you give the more it looks good on you in the long run. So just remember that the next time you see someone changing someone else's painting or others works. They work so hard on because why would they work so hard on somthing that someone else is just gonna go back in and change it.        ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e5e4c1236d7,A165EEC2E930,Teachers should be the ones to design our summer projects for many different reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6ffdfb00e9cf,A165EEC2E930,"They know what is needed for us to know by the time the next school year comes around, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f1e03527ff4f,A165EEC2E930,most of the time they have a better understanding of what we need to learn ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2b9c5b2e2a96,A165EEC2E930,if kids were to design the summer projects they will most likely forget many factors or make it too easy and not put as much effort into it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+81a236e9ecbe,A165EEC2E930,Teachers should gather together and create the summer projects based off what they know that we will need to know for the upcoming years. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ff9b8b0bffc2,A165EEC2E930,"This can be really helpful because most kids think that some things we learn will not be useful or won't do us any good but the only ones who really know what will be needed for the years to come, are the teachers. This can be such an advantage for the students and teachers. Instead of the teachers spending so much time in the beginning of the year going back over what we learned the year before they can just get right into the lesson because what needed to be reviewed has already been refreshed in our memories over the summer because of the project. By teachers creating the summer project, it can help make class time more valuable and it can help spend less time on reviewing things from previous years. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5220eeae6953,A165EEC2E930,"If the students were to design the summer project way more things would come into effect, like how the project will be graded, what is on there vs. what should've been on there, and everything important we left off. As students we dont know what we need to learn that is clearly why we are being taught. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32f8ff89db02,A165EEC2E930,"Teachers have the best way of helping us understand what we need to learn and most of the time they know what is best for our learning. That is why we have teachers, so we can be taught what we need to know. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4914a3ae9fd3,A165EEC2E930,"Students all have different ways of learning, and yes not every teacher is can cater to every student and teach them the way they needed to be taught but at the end of the day the teachers are the ones who help us the most with our education and teach us the important things we need to know. Not every student can just come up with a summer project already knowing everything that should be incorporated into it. Teachers have a much better understanding of what needs to be taught and what we need to go over so we can understand it better and know our material. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce07977539de,A165EEC2E930,A big part in learning for many students is being challenged. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+74ae34862a46,A165EEC2E930,"Do you really think if a student designed the summer project that it will be challenging ? or will it be so easy that it doesn't really help the student grasp the concept of the material ? Many students find ways to do just the bare minimum to get them by, or they find ways to get the project done without really knowing what they are even being taught or to get it done without knowing what they are really doing. Many teachers find or have many different ways to help students understand what is being taught and also make sure that student is actually trying and getting by so easy. Most students will do what they have to do to get them by and that isnt really helping us learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c5e9fa4e3827,A165EEC2E930,"In conclusion it is in the best interests of most students if the teachers make the summer projects because they have a much better understanding of what can help us and what we need to know for the upcoming school year. In most classes the teachers spend the beginning of the school year going over material from the previous year, if the teacher makes the summer the project they can easily see what we do need to go over and what we dont and it can save us so much time in the classroom to learn new things instead of going over what we already know and have been taught.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+efcec58d4fa5,A187E6D70752,"Extracurricular activities are extremely fun. For example, in my opinion I love being in a extracurricular activity. After a while of being in a extracurricular activity you get very stressed. Extracurricular activities are sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council. The principal at Generic_School has decided that all students must participate in a activity, but not everyone agrees with his decision. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7b1bf7bde1a0,A187E6D70752,I disagree that all students must participate in a extracurricular activity ,Position,Effective,,,
+3bd8189c79aa,A187E6D70752,not all students have the time to be in a extracurricular activity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ef22d1483541,A187E6D70752,and students have less time in their regular classes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5a651e49e759,A187E6D70752,A extracurricular activity is useless for some of the students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8097610258d3,A187E6D70752,According to teachers students get stress having to deal with an activity at school. Students worry about the activities and could get distracted. More projects or work having to deal with. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41a357cdf046,A187E6D70752,"Also most students are not very interested in sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84c782e675f9,A187E6D70752,Students could also stress parents with projects and more work from the activities that they have to deal with. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e44c8affadf,A187E6D70752,"For example, my friend Generic_Name gets stressed with the work he already has in class and a extracurricular activity would not be very helpful for him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4148e6341786,A187E6D70752,"Having less time in their regular classes makes teachers also stress. Teachers have less time in class to teach students what they need to learn. Students learn less and goof more around in the activities. The grades of students could decrease badly because they are not learning enough. Also not all students are caught up in class and they would have less time in class to finish their makeup work. For example, some students do not show up to school and they would not have much time to catch up with the work that other students have finished in class. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7fafe4f4ba15,A187E6D70752,Once my friend Generic_Name was in two extracurricular actives he was very stressed after only two weeks. He had so much work he owed and did not have enough time in class to catch up. So my friend Generic_Name decided to convince his principle to take the extracurricular activities away. The reason was because the activities made students stress to much. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5eb507b06c04,A187E6D70752,"I do not agree that all students must participate in a extracurricular activity because not all students have the time to deal with a extracurricular activity, and students have less time in their regular classes. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d22d9099559f,A1F48D16C67B,"Using technology to read student,s emotional expressions some student's are bored some sleeping and some stressing doing the test but the others are happy and working in the test averyone has the percent of the emotional.
+
+taking about Eckman i classified some basic emotions too people now are bored, sleeping, stress, sad, and fear because they want to pass the test and do good this work everyone has something in hi's face.
+
+The facial expressions shows some emotional like happy , anger ect.
+
+every day we have differnt caract or diferent emotional feeling and i don't know how Monna Lisa can be really intended tom bring a smile for us face. i thonk i cant recognize how my best friend feeling is just lokking her eyes cause i know her i and I know when she is happy, sad, bored, confusedand fear, I think people show the feelings but some people can's see because they don't care about it. I think that techonology is a great idea for us or some people who want to know feeling about some people important in their life. I think every emotional has one special moment sometimes are not special but its life and we can't do something abou it. Sonetines we have mixed of emotions like the Monna Lissa. She look happy but at the same time serious. Her smile look like different she can't smile like us. The reson of that is now she is just a painting. Leonardo da Vinci's paint the Monna Lisa but he die that the reason she doens't have the aye browns and thats why she sook serious. That is the reason she look like with different emotional feeling cause she don't have eye browns and she look likr that. we can see the movements in the people face and we can take an idea of how they are or how feeling and emotional are the face show everything. My conclussion is everyone have different emotional but if we want to know their feeling or emotional we need to stay with that person we need to meet the people spend time with him/her we can't say oh I need that techonology to see my wife feeling or my husband felling or a fried I mean is a good techonology but we need to spend time with the person the techonology can't do everything to us. We have the option let the techonology do that for us or do that for people if we really care about his feeling or emotional. For me the better option is the second one meet the people and ask some question to show the special boy or girls they are special for me and i want know more about him. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83aac3d3adc1,A1F48D16C67B,I like how the techonology work but we need to do the staff for us. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f73805636171,A24EFA2DE8DC,I believe it would be a smart idea because then you can tell how they're emotionally feeling ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f2cedd133e37,A24EFA2DE8DC,It could make people happier. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0f6be3bba3bf,A24EFA2DE8DC,"And you can tell if it's a real smile by there muscular actions the cheek bones lift the corner of your mouth. But if you got a fake smile, the mouth is stretched sideways faces don't lie professors say. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79d0d2df1074,A24EFA2DE8DC,"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. ""Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression"" (like not smiling as broadly) Using video imagery. The new emotion-recognition software. They track these special movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units , the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab832f67d97a,A24EFA2DE8DC,"Imagine a computer thuat shows when you're happy or sad. If you smile when a web ab appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown , the next ad will be different. It could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. ""The same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive- for videogames or video surgery most communication is non verbal ,including emotional communication so computers need to understand that too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95cb08abc2be,A24EFA2DE8DC,"Hold on we can actually ""calculate"" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel? The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face ; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movements of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b0f0a3e9b6d,A25EE918057D,Venus exploration I can tell the author cares about venus by putting down many ways humans can exploer it ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b7ef7574bca5,A25EE918057D,from going there he says it was very worthy of going we would just need a blimp like vehicle too hover over 30 miles above the land becuse the surface of venuse is very hot just in the blimp hovering over 30 miles would be 170 dagrees but where the blimp is sitting its at sae levels on earth. They are finding out ways too make electronics go onto venus because there is a lot of danger if we put a human on venus 170 dagrees is too hot for the human body unless they got the blimp at freezing tempatures the people inside will burn righht up blood will boil and people will get heat strokes. But if we put electronicson the planet that can survive the tempatures we might not have a problem with people being burned alive and we could actually exploer the lands of Venus we could make vheacles out of strong silicone for this mission it would be easier too make vehicle out of the stuff. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b9ee5080eec,A29CD7941E1D,"If i did sothing affer school i would be more in to school. Would you want to do sothing affer school. Like sports, Work on the yearbook,Or serve the student council,Or help clean up the school. If we did more thing's for the school and less about your self. You would be a better person. Be for i did affer school actirty i didn't have miny frinds. I was the kid that had no frinds i would eat at luch by my self. But then i did affer school actiry then i strared to make more and more frinds. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9b2a9aab497f,A29CD7941E1D,I think that we all should have affer school actiry ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1e0dfe3385d6,A29CD7941E1D,so we can all have more frinds and so we can tust be a better person ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35fce0231750,A29CD7941E1D,Some days i think we all need to sothing besides going home and doing noting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+873fe31fc036,A29CD7941E1D,"If we did affer school actiry. We would have more time out side or inside work. That or we could all so have a day that we thust sleep then we go out side and play. one day i was so crazy because i did noting that whole day and i need some thing to do affer school. Like if i had sothing to do affer scchool a would a lot more com. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6047e824ade4,A29CD7941E1D,And if we all did a sport we would all would be storger and more fit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d1a3cf1bc18,A29CD7941E1D,"If we did football,soccer. bassball,bastkball, or sothing like that you wold be fine. Be for i did a affer school actiry i was a big boy. But then i did the affer school actirty then i was not so big iney more. i would be done with shool and i would go srate to the actirty. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02e117ab9a47,A29CD7941E1D,And so we can be apart of the school. Most the people that i know don't do affer school actiry and they have nothing to do when school is done. They could be doing sothing but no. So if we all did sothing affer school what woud it be. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b87020f7d361,A2A9327526F7,Why do you think Don Reist want Luke Bomberger to join the Seagoing Cowboys program ? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+42d15cd0a8d4,A2A9327526F7,"Well , i think he wants him to join the Seagoing cowboys program because he probably really like it , and want his friend to join . ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9cb40c5ee9c7,A2A9327526F7,"One reason i think Luke joined because like he say , he think it would be an opportunity of a lifetime ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5891555dcf97,A2A9327526F7,"in the passage it states UNRRA hires seagoing cowboys to take care of horses , young cows , and mules that were shipped overseas , Luke and Don signed up . The passage also states in August 1945 , they recieved their orders to report to New Orleans . They arrived August 14 which was the day pacific war ended . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eea0b26a3432,A2A9327526F7,"Another reason i think Luke wanted to join , because his friend was their and he wanted to be with his friend , and do what he are doing now . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ce38c70d7c4,A2A9327526F7,"The passage states when Luke's draft board learned that he was on a cattle boat , they told him to just keep doing that for his service . The passage also states Luke turned 18 before arriving in greece , which meant he could be drafted in military service ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f6545ceaf1c1,A2A9327526F7,"The whole thing to the paragraphs and all the supporting details is that Don wanted Luke to be like him and asked him to sign up so they could be with eachother . They wanted to have good opportunities with eachother t, they wanted to grow up and become something just from being stated in the seagoing cowboy program . Like they say in the story at 18 before arriving in Greece you could be drafted in military . That right there means they wanted to be something like a star that everyone wants to meat or be important or be famous , because lots of times it gets boring sitting around all the time . They said "" hey lets get up and go sign up for something to become something together since we are close friends . ""            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b0be6cf755e,A2DAADAB1433,Should drivers be able to use their phone in shape form or fashion? No ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b6df77ca4e6e,A2DAADAB1433,"it's a distraction to anyone, no matter how skilled they are ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+38614429f241,A2DAADAB1433,It is a safety hazard for the people you share the road with and to yourself. The leading cause of a wreck is because of drivers are paying attention to their phones and not the road ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad5626610c8c,A2DAADAB1433,"One the other hand if there is an actual emergency and you need to answer it pull over as soon as possible. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5182a6c333ce,A2DAADAB1433,"How many times have you been in the car and you look around and see people using their phones while driving? A lot of times, am I correct? Of Course I am around about 10% of drivers use their phone while driving, during the holiday that number increase a whole 15% ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fddf18dd808e,A2DAADAB1433,About 26% of accidents are caused by people using their phones while being behind the wheel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46acfc06da8d,A2DAADAB1433,"
+In the state of Georgia there is a law called the hands free law. Which states that driver a prohibited to have their cellular devices in their possession while driving ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8d5b109a5bd,A2DAADAB1433,So with that being said that backes my argument up even more. And it isn't just Georgia there is so many other states that have it to. So we all know if the government has a law on it its a real problem. If caught breaking this law you can be written a ticket 50 dollars or more depending if its is your first offence or not. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f9e3e6e70c8,A2DAADAB1433,Now there are some moments when you just have to use your phone. Like when you are switching a song. Or even when you know its an emergency and you just have to answer it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+69d0d4c5a1e0,A2DAADAB1433,"If you are a parent and you child text saying they need you because they're not feeling well, have to text them back because they are not allowed to really use their phone in school so you can't call them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d5f7832af25,A2DAADAB1433,So therefore drivers should not be able to use their phones while driving. It is a distraction. It is one of the leading causes for car accidents. It is also a very expensive ticket so I encourage drivers to stay away from their phones while driving. Unless you absolutely need to use it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7752f3aaf616,A2DAD0A2B796,these summer projects should be student - designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7510bed54d73,A2DAD0A2B796,students can be more creative with what they want to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+685838a1d659,A2DAD0A2B796,students work best when they can do their own project their way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88e5e4790156,A2DAD0A2B796,they can ask a friend or a relative to help them with the project over the summer . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7062f68db789,A2DAD0A2B796,"Some people may think these summer projects should be student - designed because , students can be more creative with what they want to do ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eee66805c617,A2DAD0A2B796,"This will help students in a large way because , every time students get assigned a project it's what the teacher want them to do , this time the project is going to be about what the students want to do . It's a bigger chance of a student getting a better grade on the project because , they can do a project about sports , music , hobbies , and things students like to do during off time . If the project was teacher - designed , students will have to do projects about math , social studies , and science , things that students wouldn't want to do a project on because it's less fun and boring . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d6220e6aa8d,A2DAD0A2B796,Students work best when they can do their own project their way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2016fa8e49b,A2DAD0A2B796,"Students work best when they can do their own project their way because , a lot of students dislike when the teacher want them to do a project their way and the project is about something they dislike doing , and the teacher have things set up their way . Students will also like to do they project on their own , so they can be more focused about what they want to do , not what the teacher wants to do . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dd749d48114e,A2DAD0A2B796,"If a student was to ask a friend or a relative to help them with their project over the summer , it would be better for the student ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed628afda92e,A2DAD0A2B796,that friend or relative could be really good in a subject or maybe something your not good at and they can help you with that subject or that one thing your not good at but they are . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+317e3d2ec4c0,A2DAD0A2B796,"some people may think these summer projects should be student - designed because , students can be more creative with what they want to do , students work best when they can do their own project their way , and students can ask a friend or a relative to help them with the project over the summer . ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+22ca75bd6376,A3041B0D7D5E,"In the article ""The challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy to go explore from the dangers that Venus has. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7acfd6ee30cd,A3041B0D7D5E,"An evidence that it says that the author is supporting this idea is in paragraph five. In paragraph it says that "" Solor power would be plentiful, and raidiation would not exceed Earth level. Not easy condition, but survivable for humans."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a592e4584b5f,A3041B0D7D5E,"In the bottom of the second paragraph it says ""Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenge plant for humans to study, despite its proximity to us."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b04367dac0a,A3041B0D7D5E,"In paragraph the author is describing how Venus was like a long time ago, covered with large oceans and that it could of have supported various forms of life. The author also describes how the planet looks like today with rocks, valleys, and mountains. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+72b226214ac7,A3041B0D7D5E,In paragragh six it talks about how researchers and scientist are working on innovations that would make the machines last long enough while exploring Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e708c72cb1fd,A3041B0D7D5E,"Paragraph six also talks about how researchers can't take any rocks, gas, or anything that is from Venus, to no make it a risk and researchers can't take pictures or videos that well because the light of the picture or video cannot penetrate the dense of the atmoshere which is ineffective. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1a9a63186b5,A3041B0D7D5E,"In the bottom of paragraph seven it says that "" Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28334db6f9ae,A3041B0D7D5E,". By comparison, system that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2c66347c959,A3041B0D7D5E,I think that reseachers and scientist are learning more and more about humans going to Venus to see if it is safe to go.       ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+313ec2e8764b,A3047C282C45,"Planing. Can the tecnologic read face of the emocion of human. Scientit are makeing computer to keeping growing u. The most comun expression is the paint of Mona Lisa Smile. This paint can be express the emotion of happy, sadness and same more. The computer can read your face with your own muscle. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+921101ade8dd,A3047C282C45,"""Dr. Huang and his collenge are experts at developing better ways for human and computers to communicate"". The main computer are growing up to be able accepting human. In the past nobody know the real face of tecnologic. The scientits are proving evidents the human can comunite witha none human. In other way the expression to seem a emotion through a computer is complice to understand, but the reason to develop the tectologic is to understand the human.
+
+""She'83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. It's the subject of leonardo de Vinci's Renaissance painting.""This argument can be decription of Leanardo's paint. The Mona Lisa Smile can be dectetive by a computer too. The way to decribe the same way. The happyness of the paint can tranfer us. She is happy but the same way to be happy is afear to do a mistake . The computer are showing work to be able to do it. The paint is the best work of Leonedo because is showing the real face of the human.
+
+""Yet Dr. Huang OBserves that artists such as da Vinci studies human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to covery specific emotions.""That way to identifies a reason to able read your face is the muscle. The way in each part of your face have a muscle that crear a feelinf acceptable. The face have a lot of muscle. The most muscle able to express is the smile. ""Empathy (feeling sameone else's emocional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person;s facial expressions.""The next or side of the smile can show where is happyness. The term to asomeone accep you. Is the way to understand them first. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d1ec8145a5f1,A3047C282C45,In coclusion a computer are able to read your face. The computer are developing to a human understand themself. The first moment of your face can be good or bad. Well sametime are deficult ourself to able smeli or cry. To have affect is a great emotion to feel.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1d4c9a60d3ba,A319351F1036,I think the claim would be that the new technology that they called the Facial Action Coding System is and good and bad idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac2d45075de4,A319351F1036,some times it could brake down and you don't have anything else to use to see what your face look like when you are not happy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8472c2387c29,A319351F1036,Some times it work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32df1bdc4202,A319351F1036,some people would now how to keep it up and nothing would happen to it but if something did happen to it they wold know how to fits it real fast then you would be able to use it again if not you could build a new one if you would want too. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0c44f9440a6,A319351F1036,"They would show you if your really happy or surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness by using the new technology that they built for you to see if you feel bad or anything you need to. now if you don't now already.
+
+They might even make you look at youself in the mirror even if you don't really want to so you can see what you look like even if you really don't want to look at your face even though you look pretty.
+
+If they make a paintting of you would keep beause you should it will make you have some feeling inside your body telling you that you are very pertty and you should be happy about it but if you think that you are very ugly then their is something wrong with you cause everyone is pertty in thier own ways even if you think your not. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f535f4745eda,A32414F5B216,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author describes how the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions, that's a really smart idea right?. The software can see your emotions, six emotions, and facial muscles.
+
+First, the person who made this software was Prof. Thomas Huang, the Beckman institute fro Advanced Science at the University of Illinois who started to find better ways for humans and computers to communicate. The first subject he wanted to do was Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. Your maybe thinking how do u use a software just to find out how someone is feeling well...
+
+In fact, the computer takes the model of the picture or what ever is there,but it must have human muscles in the picture ir 3-D model the human muscles is called ""acton unit"". It only takes in the model if it see's it have forty-four major muscles like a human would have. Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman has classified for the software to have six emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness.
+
+Dr. Thomas Huang and his worjkers or friends that helped him with the software made six basic emotins that the human muscles have and made it to where it only workd if it have the 3-D effect with fourty-four human facial muscles witch is every smart. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a138687cf473,A32A838D1C3F,Do you really want to visit Venus? Because I sure do. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+025569850b17,A32A838D1C3F,But the problem is it's extremely dangerous. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23babd6140ac,A32A838D1C3F,"Mostly because the temperature there is 90 times greater than our normal temperature. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. That sound dangerous, and it is dangerous because it could hurt and possibly kill someone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14bbd701c6e2,A32A838D1C3F,"Venus is our sister planet. Some call us twins because of the sizes we both have. But, Venus is the closest to the sun like Mercury is the first panet next to the sun. So Venus is the warmer part of our sisterhood, and Earth are the cold part of our sisterhood. It's sort of like Venus is Anna because of her warm personality. And earth is like Elsa, because of her frozen powers, so she is extremely cold when it comes down to things. Earth at the moment is like Elsa because of its winter landish time of the year. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c21a72de7656,A32A838D1C3F,"To be truthful, trying to go to Venus is a good way to learn more about the planets and to see if there is any living sources out there in the galaxy. But at the same time it's a good way to get killed.(not saying you should do it for the fun of it or for suicide.) ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8ef1866b02f7,A32A838D1C3F,You should at least make some sort of suit that is safe for acid to hit it and so it doesn't melt your suit. It will be pretty cool to finally go to other planets and explore them. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e350d385d046,A32A838D1C3F,"For this entire essay I learned about new stuff. I learned that there is acid rain in Venus. There is a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus, I thought that was cool to learn. I also learned that Mercury is the first planet in front of the sun. I totally forgot about that, so I was surprised. So that's what I learned. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d3b2485986e9,A38F35A9F711,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" stated that meeting the challenge of exploring Venus is valuable because it will provide more knowledge of the planet, but also because humans will be curious about many dangerous things in the future. The author stated many dangers and doubts of exploring the planet, but then described solutions that may or may not work. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6cff2009b35a,A38F35A9F711,It is contradictive that he decided to include facts and data that went against his own thoughts because he came back and listed data that went against the negative statements. The author created confusion to what he actually believes. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6af04b1824fb,A38F35A9F711,"The author of the article described Venus as Earth's ""twin."" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+31bc38b598f4,A38F35A9F711,"That suggests that we already know some facts about Venus such as it's density and size, which is enough to make people curious to how much about Venus we already know. He said that we know that Venus has many similar structures to Earth, such as mountains, valleys, and craters. If Venus is Earth's ""twin,"" doesn't mean that it is extremely similar to Earth? The statement could make people curious about how close Venus really is to Earth, or it could make them wonder why we should bother risking people's safety if we already know that Venus is just like Earth ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+764501b39767,A38F35A9F711,The author needed to be clearer on which way he wanted people to view that statement ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+953efa06886c,A38F35A9F711,"The author also brought up the dangers of visiting Venus multiple times. Then, he would proceed to follow the statement with tested and untested solutions. It was hard to tell which way he sided ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8.28774257E+055,A38F35A9F711,"According to the author, ""Venusian geolegy and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes..."" He later stated that NASA has a possible idea to send blimp-like vehicles to travel the surface of Venus, but that would not provide a detailed enough view of the ground. In order to get his point across to the audience, he should not have kept going agianst information ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+54264f7e326e,A38F35A9F711,The author went off topic throughout the article. The different information created slight confusion as to what the message he was trying to convey ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7b21e5635a61,A38F35A9F711,"The author stated that NASA is working on an approach to studying Venus that involves mechanical computers. He then said, ""The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers..."" It is irrelevant to the message when the mechanical computers were envisioned or the fact that it is shocking to hear that computers existed in 1940. It was hard to understand why computers were important to the article at all. The author made it difficult to focus on the message when he was stating random facts that were not important to the idea he was trying to support. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+99773df7b310,A38F35A9F711,"The author did not make it extremly obvious as to what he was truly trying to convey. If he would been more clear and less contradictive, then it would have been more obvious that he supports the idea that Venus is worthy of being explored. Also, it would have been easier to understand the point he was trying to put across if he would have stayed on topic throughout the article. The message of the article should be obviously supported by the author.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+54334f55a9f8,A394F82B98D2,"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration also knon as (NASA) are studing the Venus the closest planet to our home, Earth. Venus is sometimes called the ""Evening Star"" because its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+718c581feaac,A394F82B98D2,Venus is referred to as Earths twin in terms of density and size and its being studdied for more details about it. Venus has a thick athmosphere of almost 97b percent carbon dioxide that cover it like a blanket ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+618f1561e41f,A394F82B98D2,"A danger to studying this planet is that the surface is hot very hot and normally has a surface temp of 800 degrease Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth making it risky and dangerous. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa46b9a2872b,A394F82B98D2,NASA is on a mission to send humans to Venus but the problem is that Venus surface sometimes gets to 170 degrease Farenheit. Which makes landing nearly impossible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bce8335f016,A394F82B98D2,"The only way woukd be to hover 30 miles obove its surface. They cant take samples of rock, gas or anythiing else from a distance Therefore scientsts seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and use the risksas challenges. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83528732f15f,A394F82B98D2,Striving to meet Venus is challenging But one challenge were willin to take ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e78631dd42c8,A394F82B98D2,their so many uknown descorvies waiting to be descovered and the risk will later turn in a challenge and that challenge will one day turn into sucess. With out advanced technology and the studying I know we cn make it their.                    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4789aa8fc34e,A3AD25786D36,Earth as we know it has been striving for many years but our population is growing rapidly due to everyone havng children and deaths. We can only do so much one day this planet we call earth will be like the rest of the planets. Not being able to live on because of bad conditions ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+34e59942fbbc,A3AD25786D36,"Nasa has been doing other approaches to studying venus. they tried to send a couple space crafts to venus but the rough and cloudy planet made the spacecrafts fail due to the enviroment. Nasa has been doing test to figure out something that can stand the venus enviroment. They haven't sent a spacecraft to venus in three decades. ''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familir features such as valleys, mountains and craters.'' Venus is the nearest option for us. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans so it probaly could support human life but we still have to take the risks. how would we live on a planet that doesnt even have what we need to survive. A thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. would we be wearing suits around all day the averge temperture on venus is roughly 800 degress fahrenheit, we dont get past 105 degress fahrenheit ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6de875ddcec1,A3AD25786D36,Yes the planet sounds to good to be true but if that is what we have that is atleast like earth we should give it a try. considering the fact of life on another planet is fascinating ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dd07e78a90a2,A3AD25786D36,We can make the trip to venus but you cant even see it you will by flying over dense clouds and if you go under the clouds it's very hot ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+45a0bd5a438a,A3AD25786D36,In conclusion Venus is like earths sister and if we can find a way to make it liveable to humans we should try it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1429a0014a8d,A3BB032558E2,"This article is abaut the platent of venus that are sometimes called Evening Star this is the secon planet from our sun,this planet is one that tje people can see from a large distance it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. this is the most dangerous for the people because the sun is like the fire the people can`t see and touch this in a short distance the sun and they light can be beautiful but is it most thing that is dangerous in the universe. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c3ea7741dfd4,A3BB032558E2,"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size ,and occasionally the closest in distance too, venus is a planet visit for the people,venus have many things that are interesting the people vistit this place for know somethings that they don`t know but they need know venus is one planet that are close with mart and earth venus is study for the humsn science.
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon blankets venus. On the planet the temperatures average can be over a 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is like 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet,the conditions of the this planet can be more extreme than anything humans encounteron the planet earth venus is the only planet that have hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,the other planet that are closer to the sun is mercury , beyond high pressure and heat.
+
+Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting of volcanes powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to a lang on its surface. venus have nomerous factors that contribute reputation as a challenging platent for humans to study,despite its aproximity to us, venus should have a sulfuric acids in the venus atmosphera ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b32f24d5e25,A3BB032558E2,In all of this we have a question Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface.? Venus is a fascinated planet for the astronomers because it may wellonce have been mthe most Earth like planet in the solar sytem venus is a planet know for the rocks and gas that there is.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+72220bd33450,A3BFEB7818C7,"Have you ever wondered what venus is like? Well studying venus can be very dangerous with its carbon dioxide atmosphere, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, extremely high temperature and more ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+66dc33592d58,A3BFEB7818C7,Even though it can be dangerous it is a worthy pursuit. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f49acd358d5,A3BFEB7818C7,Studying venus is a worthy pursuit because it is our sister planet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+75f1a8eabc21,A3BFEB7818C7,we are very curious about it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6dbdfeef60f0,A3BFEB7818C7,"human can survive venus conditions. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd0436a12536,A3BFEB7818C7,Venus is known as Earths sister planet but we don't know much about it and have never attempted going there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0962a549217,A3BFEB7818C7,"Venus is Earths sister planet because the text talks about how venus is the cloest planet to earth based on size and density. Also Venus has features like vlley, mountains, and craters like earth does and Venus shows that it was most likely covered in oceans long ago and could of supported various life forms. This is why we should explore venus because it is our sister planet ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+423097d76a7b,A3BFEB7818C7,Human curiosity plays a big role into why we should explore Venus. Humans are very curious about the planet since it shows signs that life could of lived there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f7b153fdf13,A3BFEB7818C7,Also it resembles Earth so much that we want to know more about its geogrpahy. In general we want to know more about this planet and get up close to it and observe it directly instead of from a far. We also want to know what gases there are and so maybe we could build something that wouldn't melt when it lands. This is how human curtiosity plays a role in discovering Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f48937ad0b6c,A3BFEB7818C7,Venus also is a worthy pursuit becuase the text states the temperature is 170 degrees and it states humans can survive on this planet. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+707900911a2c,A3BFEB7818C7,So even though the temperature and atmosphere seem very dangerous it is worth the exploration because humans can survive so with proper training we could explore Venus. The article also talks about NASA building something to get 30 feet off of Venus so if we can get that close then eventually we will be able to get on the planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5e7baf85676,A3BFEB7818C7,"In conclusion Venus is a worthy pursuit even though it shows many dangers. We can overcome those dangers and make traveling to Venus less dangerous. Since its our sister planet it is worth exploring to find more out about our own planet even. Our human curiosity makes us want to explore Venus in more depth. Also humans can survive on it so with new technology and training they can travel there and be safe. This is why traveling to Venus is a worthy pursuit because it is our sister planet, we are curious about it, and humans can already survive on it.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3015a3495812,A43D4896E15A,Did you know at least one out of every three humans use their phone while in the capacity of an operating vehicle. In today's Essay I'm going to briefly explain why you should and should not operate a phone in an operating vehicle ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bebbf88fe692,A43D4896E15A,In my opinion you should not let anyone use a phone while in an operating video because it could become a distraction to everyone that's in the vehicle. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2843462f2bb9,A43D4896E15A,"But they're a few pros and cons that come with using a phone in an operating vehicle.
+
+In the first elace why would you want anyone in the vehicle to operate a phone in the vehicle which could become a distraction to the driver and everyone who's in the video. To me that extremely dangerous because if you didn't know in today's society everyone likes to use their phone while in the vehicle. Phones shouldn't be even be thought about while in the vehicle because that's how most accidents happen because of distracted drivers. Which is basically a second distraction to drivers. Just say your phone rings while your driving so you take your eyes off the road to see who's calling is intensively increasing your risk for an accident. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5e4b2e25259,A43D4896E15A,In addition to not using your phone in an operating vehicle there are a few reasons on why you should. Well first off the driver should not be the one to hvsicallv use the ohone ut a resoonsi le ad It should. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8e55ecadd021,A44D40ED0F9B,"Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is an amazing opprituinity. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+97534bb8f2bf,A44D40ED0F9B,You can see some of the most amazing things that you never thought you would ever see in a million years. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a5c80a4fd64,A44D40ED0F9B,"Joining means your putting yourself in a postion that you have to take seriously, but of course you need to make sure you have fun along the way. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a6d45ece89b,A44D40ED0F9B,"If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you could see Countries like China, Europe and more. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7bada567dc0d,A44D40ED0F9B,"In pharagraph 2 it states that when you become a Seagoing Cowboy you take care of horses, young cows, and mules that are being shipped over seas. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4dbebd807476,A44D40ED0F9B,"You'll make new friends along the way, too! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c08841f55a40,A44D40ED0F9B,"Pharagraph 7 explains how Luke, a Seagoing Cowboy himself, was ready for this hard work mostly because he helped his aunt on her farm as a boy. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc3add3d0061,A44D40ED0F9B,Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy changes a persons life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+826f7bc5945e,A44D40ED0F9B,"When they see all the amazing sights: caring for the animals and, how they are making new friends, and caring for others. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f2fdcc5f0541,A44D40ED0F9B,If you join you will see how much being a Seagoing Cowboy may change your life. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d74e08b627f2,A44D40ED0F9B,"By taking on the responsiblitiy of taking care for the animals and others.
+
+It could just change your life too! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91248989aad1,A44F6859B4D8,Do you think that we should have school activites? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+04a8e7622d5f,A44F6859B4D8,I think we should ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1f12c485a871,A44F6859B4D8,it could possible benefit kid in learning. Which means helping kids with better learning that is gong to benefit them by getting up and doing an activity that might help refresh their minds ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95c48eb25f28,A44F6859B4D8,instead of the kid siting in class all day learning about something that might not be instresting to them and they might start to day dream and them not learning anything. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d191d61c610,A44F6859B4D8,"According to a studies done by Virginia Techs mental studies, states that 74% of students fall asleep or day dream and stop listening and the other 26% of students listen and learn because they are involed in activities that help refresh there minds and givings them time to thing. What this means is that 74% of student stop listening do to being board or just no intrested but the other 26% is in a club or sport that helps that student refresh their mind and helps them think so they are ready for classes and other work that is needed to be done. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+157cba1a24e9,A44F6859B4D8,depeneding on the activity it could help build a skill in a student. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+589050f73cf7,A44F6859B4D8,"according to sports news website on collage sports, suggests that 25% of sports players in collage sports that train hard and keep lead to building skills that could help down the road and the other 75% of collage players that dont train hard and just sit around learn how to succed through failer. This means that the collage students that try their best are the one mostly building skills that will help them succed and the other 75% who dont try learn skills through not putting more work into it knowing what they need to try to improve on to become better. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9741c3a1cbb,A44F6859B4D8,trying something new could help find things you might like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09f7566cc5a5,A44F6859B4D8,"according to a studies done at a Virgina univitsy, suggest that 83% of the kid in school that had join club or sports had found a hobby that they enjoy doing and the other 17% of the students that took a club or a sport didn't or could find an intrest in that subject of activities. this mean that students found new hobby that enjoy to do in school when they have tine to do it and the students that didn't find a hobby that they dont enjoy probably dropped out of the club or the sport they were in ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae1bc5fa5f3b,A44F6859B4D8,"the other point of view, It would be another thing added to a students list and another thing they would have to stress about ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+59901ff6f79e,A44F6859B4D8,"According Anderson shores a mental health studies doctor, states that 65% of students that have something else to add to their scedules stresses them do to having a bussy scedule already and the 35% percent of the other students do get stressed out do to not having a bussy scedule or they have good time management. This means that the students that have bussy scedules and cant add this to their scedules so they get stressed and dont know what to do, do to the fact of not being able to find time for it, and the other 35% has time for it so they can add it to their scedules. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+562c36d91435,A44F6859B4D8,However this is true but let me tell you why this isnt the case for all students. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+165423524a56,A44F6859B4D8,"According to a studies done on time managment, states that 80% of students could manage their time so they could do these activity and the other 20% said the reason they couldn't was do to not properly setting up a good scedule. Basically this means that 80% had the time for it and the other 20% of students couldn't because they didn't set a scedule up properly or just didnt set one up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+49e8ce9571d8,A44F6859B4D8,"To sum it up, there should be activitys it help the student you the reader better learn and buil skill maybe even find a hobby that you like. I think the people that go against this shouldn't but that my opinion, and the reason I think they shouldn't is because it helps benefit learning it help the student refresh so they don't fall alsleep in class o start day dreaming because if they stop listening how are they going to learn. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+695776d55d61,A451B2D00666,"It's a week before your junior year starts. You're laying in bed, soaking up your last few days of freedom. Then it hits you- you have a book report due the first day of school. Panic sets in, chaos erupts. Oh, the joy of summer projects. Most students have been through the process of completing a summer project. In most circumstances, these projects are a strict set of directions created by the teacher. Summer projects are expected, especially when taking difficult classes. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8271d6d47ada,A451B2D00666,"Students, due to different commitments, should be able to design their own summer projects. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+f1cf95886ed9,A451B2D00666,"Teenagers today are exposed to a lot more than when our parents were our age. Some of those things aren't beneficial, such as too much screen time or drinking underage. But, a lot of this exposure is good. We're exposed to different cultures at an early age, we have easier access to education, and we know when disaster strikes, it's our responsibility to help. Because of all this new exposure, students often make commitments over the summer. Students accepted into college summer programs go to learn more about something their interested in. Some make the world a better place by doing service with a church group or other organizations. College is expensive, so a large quantity of teenagers get a summer job to save up money. There's always going to be the group of teenagers who sit at home all summer watching TV and eating junk food. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8fbd536a8405,A451B2D00666,"With this wide variety of responsibilities and commitments, having every student complete the same exact summer project is unreasonable. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+79320e169957,A451B2D00666,"At most schools, you don't meet your teacher until a week prior to school starting. Knowing nothing about the class is a scary thought if you're spending hours a day working on a summer project, assigned by a teacher you've never met. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d83e8861a490,A451B2D00666,"If students know nothing about a teacher and the class they lead, how are they supposed to know if they're going to stay in the class? It's ridiculous to ask for a teenager to commit to an intensive project when they might only be in the class for a day. Most schools that allow schedule changes will forget about that grade if you drop the class early on into the school year. It may be nice that you don't have to be in that class anymore, but hours upon hours of your life were wasted on a project you'll never get a grade for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6145f8161af0,A451B2D00666,"If students were able to design their own summer project, it would not only give them creative freedom but allow them to feel proud of what they turn in, regardless if they stay in the class. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c2019e03e22,A451B2D00666,"No student enjoys writing an essay every time they do a project, so if the projects were created by students the final results could be even more outstanding than what any teacher could've designed. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+dde8059266f6,A451B2D00666,"If students are designing their own summer projects, it not only shows their personality and character- it raises their expectations for the class in the best way possible. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f2b3c340a4d7,A451B2D00666,"Most teachers want their students to be excited for their class. Even if the class course is torturous, a teacher who loves their job can make all the difference in the world. If a teacher gives their students the freedom of creating their own summer project, the students will have a good image of the teacher. Students that enjoy a class tend to be the ones who do the best. Most teenagers don't enjoy being tied down by rules, so getting them excited for a class that has rules is the ideal situation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88a39a1c610c,A451B2D00666,"Summer projects aren't a bad thing. They not only keep a student's brain activated during the summer, but they give them a taste of a class before they commit fully. Because of all the opportunities we have as teenagers in today's age, our schedules can get pretty busy. Although, I do still think an education is important. Summer projects allow students to ease themselves back into the routine of the school year before it hits them like a train. If those projects are student designed, it allows us to learn about time and self management. They also allow us to express our creativity. I'm not saying someone who draws a stick figure should get the same credit as someone who writes a five page essay. In my ideal situation, the teacher can give their students a vague set of directions so the students are free to express themselves.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3df77164dddf,A455B4430327,Many people have car where they live. The thing they don't know is that when you use a car alot of thing can happen ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a376782534d3,A455B4430327,you can get in accidet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00f849de742a,A455B4430327, the smoke that the car has is bad to breath on if someone is walk ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ab48e6815b6,A455B4430327,"but in VAUBAN,Germany they dont have that proble because 70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars,and 57 percent sold a car to move there. Street parkig ,driveways and home garages are forbidden on the outskirts of freiburd that near the French and Swiss borders. You probaly won't see a car in Vauban's streets because they are completely ""car free"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03702879e24c,A455B4430327,"but If some that lives in VAUBAN that owns a car ownership is allowed,but ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b763db225b21,A455B4430327,"there are only two places that you can park a large garages at the edge of the development,where a car owner buys a space but it not cheap to buy one ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aee379c82d7f,A455B4430327,"they sell the space for you car for $40,000 along with a home. The vauban people completed this in 2006 ,they said that this an example of a growing trend in Europe,The untile states and some where else are suburban life from auto use this is called ""smart planning"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7e068048023,A455B4430327,The current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailes the ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7478ccde5994,A455B4430327,passengee cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car intensive in the United States. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+83d5ce72059f,A455B4430327,"I honeslty think that good idea that they did that is Vaudan because that makes cities denser and better for walking and in VAUBAN there are 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c840ce74cab1,A455B4430327,"In the artical David Gold berg said that ""All of our development since World war 2 has been centered on the cars,and that will have to change"" and i think that was very true what David Gold said because alot thing we need cars to do we can go anyway were with out cars beacuse some people are a very lazy to walk to place thats why they alot of people use car and i think that it was a good idea that that they did that in VAUBAN so people can see how we really don't need car to go to place from place because we can walk from were we need to go or we can ride bycles with out the use of a car. It good that they are doing that if you thik abou ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ca31e138d6c,A455B4430327,your help the earth in way and thats a very good thing to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f788e4d427a,A455B4430327,"In the United states ,the Environmental protection Agency is promoting what is called ""car reduced""communtunties ",Position,Adequate,,,
+33b310bed2e1,A455B4430327,"the legislators are starting to act,if cautiously. Maany experts expect pubic transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six years federal transportation bill to approved this year. In previous bill,80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+daf40d47dd9b,A4ADCC04C319,"On a hot summer day I remembered that I have to do my summer project. Before I started my project I thought to myself, how would summer assignments be like if it was designed by students. But then I rememebered how teachers are much more experienced in making assignments. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c31284034edf,A4ADCC04C319,"Although some may believe otherwise, summer projects should be teacher-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+2147a341f7e6,A4ADCC04C319,teachers motivate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96d9f92cd7a9,A4ADCC04C319,"give good advise to students. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+670a57f8c189,A4ADCC04C319,Teachers should be the ones to create summer projects because they are know how to motivate their students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+37f317e3cda2,A4ADCC04C319,"For example, my trigonmetry teacher gave me a lot of praise when I got an ""A"" on the last test. These praises pushed me to continue doing well in the class. When teachers acknowledge students progress, it motivates students to succeed. For instance, Abraham Lincoln grew up in poverty and had to do farming and go to school at the same time. Despite knowing his background, his teachers encouraged him to focus on his education because he was a great student. Eventually, he was able to afford a higher education and went on to become the president of the United States. The motivation that teachers give to students enables students to become successful in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a497a9163a95,A4ADCC04C319,Summer assignments should be teacher-designed because they give students good advise.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da178779564d,A4ADCC04C319,"For example, my friend Generic_Name turned in her english essay four days late. Her teacher realized when the assigment was handed in late that she needed to work on her time management skills. Therefore, she guided Generic_Name with her next essay by explaining how it would be easier to start planning earlier in order to turn in her essay on time. Now, Generic_Name makes it a priority to turn in all of her assignments in on time. Another example of teachers giving students good advise is when Oprah Winfrey was doing very well in school. Her teachers saw that she had exceptional work habits and urged her to get a higher level of education. Now, she has become a famous philanthropist that helps many people in the world through her talk shows and interviews. Teachers advise encourages students to work harder and continue to progress in everything that they do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ccf4fa59d52a,A4ADCC04C319,Some may believe that summer projects should be student-designed in order for students to take on more responsibility. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+dcc19731e00e,A4ADCC04C319,"While understandable, this is inaccurate because students already have a lot of responsibilities. For instance, my friend Generic_Name, has a part time job, plays baskeball, and tutors her younger siblings. It would be difficult for her to create a summer project because she has so many other responsbilities. If she would have to design a summer project she wouldn't be able to give her time to her other priorities. Furthermore, making a summer project would result in her being stressed out. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b1544aa251cc,A4ADCC04C319,"
+Summer projects should be teacher-designed because they know how to motivate and advise students. Teachers are always seen as inspirations because of all that they do. Therefore, taking away their right to make summer projects for students would negatively influence society because they would feel unappreciated. Additonally, the way classrooms run would be completely transformed. Overall, this topic will always remain an important topic because it reflects personal opinion.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a7297c7320a2,A4E6E2D5658D,"Teachers control almost every aspect of a student's education.
+
+They assign heavy loads of homework expecting it to be complete and correct when turning it in, and then assign unnecessary amounts of classwork and projects to finish for homework at the same time.
+
+Students struggle and work hard to succeed in their classes while getting good grades, but that can come at a price of a lack of sleep, free time, and even a decreasing mental stability.
+
+Summer is suppose to be a time of relaxation and fun, a break from the stresses of school.
+
+But, teachers assigning work over the summer, so students can maintain their education, can prevent relaxation and add stresses to what is suppose to be the most care free time in a student's career. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a7ee7f36f3ed,A4E6E2D5658D,"Although, teachers assigning teacher designed work to students work over the summer establishes more structure and easier communication on the assignment and its requirements, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+09dbba872f22,A4E6E2D5658D,students should create their own assignments for the summer ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4292029ab16d,A4E6E2D5658D,it allows them more freedom with the assignment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f58e72736596,A4E6E2D5658D,increasing the ability to learn and grow at their own pace. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e7c101a8c57,A4E6E2D5658D,"When people think of summer they think of fun, traveling, relaxation, and most importantly no school work.
+
+Students work tirelessly all year, summer is students' free time, and if students have to work during their free time it should be under their regulation what their assignments consist of.
+
+Students creating their own assignments can be more enjoyable, stipulating their interests and help them learn information and lessons.
+
+School projects over the summer assigned by teachers can come in bulk and most of the time is boring.
+
+But, if students developed their own assignments for the summer then it could possibly be more enjoyable and help them learn more, for example a student would enjoy creating a graphic image project of information versus writing a paper that a teacher would normally assign.
+
+Allowing students to take the lead and create their own projects can relieve the stress of summer work by them making it pertain to their interests.
+
+In addition to an interest increase comes a comprehension increase, because students who enjoy more comprehend more. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+279445a32e5f,A4E6E2D5658D,"Allowing choice and design of assignment gives a sense of freedom, which is what students, especially teenage students, crave after months of teachers telling them what to do. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+67785ea54199,A4E6E2D5658D,"Although students creating their own assignments can create more interest and learning opportunities for them, teacher assignments provide a type of structure, formality, and stability it might be difficult for the student to achieve in their design. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a2bf30d84c17,A4E6E2D5658D,"Students may have a difficult time choosing a topic, method, or creation needed to design an assignment, especially because teachers have given the students topics and requirements necessary the entire year, so students never acquired the skill for creating assignments.
+
+Also, there is the possibility that students don't want to create their own assignment and want to stick to the teacher's book.
+
+Teacher instructions on assignments are usually clear and straight forward, which could be a lot easier for a student to understand.
+
+As well as provides the knowledge the student will need to remember during the summer.
+
+Otherwise, if students design their own assignment they might fail to retain the knowledge needed, be confused on the purpose, and not be able to fully carry out the assignment creation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8deebe3d5d6c,A4E6E2D5658D,"A big concern about summer assignments is the time allotted and if the students will actually comprehend the information meant to be maintained.
+
+Students and their families plan their summer lives months before summer work is assigned, and if people go on a two month vacation to Europe then they can't necessarily complete all the work assigned.
+
+Teenagers have jobs and children go on weeks long vacations with their parents, and they might not have the time to complete or fully understand the purpose of the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+780bf3886a3a,A4E6E2D5658D,If students created their own assignments then they could work the time for the completion of the school project around their schedules and manage their time better. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0424dd12f9a5,A4E6E2D5658D,"Students should be allowed the privilege of designing their own summer projects.
+
+Even though teachers assigning work gives structure and stability in the assignments, students designing work can increase their freedom, interest, and comprehension of their education.
+
+Also, students will learn responsibility and leadership in the process of creating and following through with their very own assignment.
+
+This will help prepare them for future creations, lean off the dependency of a teacher giving them all the work needed for their learning, while allowing the the enjoyment of summer.
+
+So let the students lead and help shape their own education.                 ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+75e3813e6c92,A4F0BACE1010,"It is not value of ad pop ups from a computer to detect student or teachers emotion, it's not right ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1dc9f9555c45,A4F0BACE1010,plus i think it's a watse of time to try and collect every emotion of evryone who uses a computer ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1a1e0911c1cc,A4F0BACE1010,"cause at some point in time the people will start to get angry about the whole emotions crap and maybe get rid of them, they may like at first but one day their just gonna get rid of it. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62270390067d,A4F0BACE1010,"Like in the article it said ""how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?"" six emotions the computer has to track, ""happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+139c0ffb20d8,A4F0BACE1010,"A computer that can sence and track muscle movement and emotions, kinda werid and freaked out to me if i had this computer and i think most people around the world would stick to just regular computers or laptops and not buy this emotional computer ad poping up crap. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aff747cfba64,A4F0BACE1010,"I would think more than emotional computers, thinking more advanced or just regular old computers thats what i would do if i were creating computers. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+563eac594d9a,A4F0BACE1010,I think we shouldn't nchange anything at all about computers ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4b292615af23,A4F0BACE1010,"if it's gonna lead to a riot or people rising up to the company because of the computers, ""we want regular computers back not the stupid emotional ones anymore!"" u know... i would do the same thing as well.            ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+397840612548,A4FBD7A27089,"Warm and soothing waves of light, the eloquent smell of nature and the outdoors, summer is indeed here. For some, summer is a much needed break from the institutional grind of schooling in America, however for others it irritates their stress. Often, students worry about the projects assigned over the summer, because they're usually tedious and require an exorbitant amount of time to complete. Although it is noted that they're a source of stress to many students, schools maintain that these projects are needed to continuously engage the students in the learning process. This predicament can be resolved by allowing students to design their own projects, which adequately shows their learning throughout the summer. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+53a046bd0e80,A4FBD7A27089,"Summer projects should be student-designed, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0de9463d60f8,A4FBD7A27089,"to engage students in learning, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7649e47cf827,A4FBD7A27089,"allow them to be cooperative amongst each other, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c6c0ead75e57,A4FBD7A27089,prevent the monotonous nature of education in America. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a3b3b9060d92,A4FBD7A27089,"Students in America struggle throughout their life attending school while accepting the burden of friendships, family and other stresses and anxieties. Summer becomes that safe haven for them, to completely decompress from their issues and take a break from the mental strain of schools, with all the tests, exams and projects that're encompassed within it. Students who are allowed the opportunity to design their own project become eager to create a product which displays their learning over the summer. Once in my freshman year, I was given an option to complete a teacher-assigned book report, or to construct an independent book report. Being allowed this opportunity made me eager to chose a book that satisfied my interests, and not be punished to endure reading a four hundred page book about trivial history. This point illustrates the impact that student-designed summer projects can instill, without the students feeling punished by the school. Learning should be a process of critical thinking and analysis, however when this process is interrupted by an external predetermined body it is detrimental to one's education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+139a04ab9bab,A4FBD7A27089,"Cooperation is a skill which gives people the ability to build upon each others strengths and weaknesses, and is the source of many significant discoveries. Often we see that the scientific community caters to its researchers by promoting peer-reviewed journals and research to be conducted. This sentiment holds true with education in America. In order for students to learn over the summer, they should be encouraged to produce their own projects with individuals whom they spend their time with during the summer. I recall being pestered by taking on the burden of conducting a lab report by myself, which caused me to feel stressed out and disengaged. One day in physics class, my teacher allowed me to conduct a lab with many of my friends to make the lab procedure dynamic. I found that by being with my contemporaries, I was inclined to learn more about physics, and to collect accurate and precise data. Students who create their own projects are allowed the opportunity to learn through cooperation, which betters suits them especially during summer break. Many students are already flustered by the work load they receive during the school year, furthermore projects in summer break should bring students together in learning not steer them away in frustration. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1eb69db0e3fc,A4FBD7A27089,"We've all seen the stereotypical depiction of education in today's society. Classes upon hallways upon schools of mindless zombies who've been bombarded with unfulfilling tasks, which demoralizes their sense to learn. Why should summer projects further foster this reality into summer vacation? Isn't the point of summer break to allow students to have time to themselves? Education is a crucial institution in America, however we must not mistake it for being the only source of learning. Learning is a life skill that ascends the classrooms and school hallways, and enters the hearts of students throughout this nation. To allow students the chance to dictate their own project gives them empowerment to extend curiosity and discovery to outside the classroom. Having done project based learning in school, I can undoubtedly state that the monotonous nature of school deprives students our freedom to learn without restrictions. Of course the material must be covered, the criteria and standards must be met and the exams must be taken, but summer time is different. Summer time should be the students' time, therefore permitting student-designed projects gives students the freedom to learn unrestricted without the monotone school structure. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e5caf8bc6ea9,A4FBD7A27089,"Although some may believe otherwise, summer projects should be student-designed to produce engagement in learning, cooperation amongst students and disrupt the monotonous school-oriented learning process. Education has always been a field where curiosity, and desires to innovate have been facilitated to bring about improvement in society. We can't always judge the circumstances to which things are, without providing a valid solution as to how those things ought to improve. Summer projects is that annual cycle where this principle can be enacted in the future. Projects designed to be student oriented can reinvigorate that desire for young people to go research and explore, while shattering the illusion of what education is depicted to be in America. What better way can we allow the continuous process of learning over the summer, than by putting the keys of that exploration in the hands of the future generation? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b9b78ddeb759,A50C90D2A2A0,Have you ever thought of being a cowboy then your in luck ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5432dfe97bc1,A50C90D2A2A0,you can be a seagoing cowboy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e5afdcfe1ac4,A50C90D2A2A0,see not just cows but unique places in the world and see places in the world that you thought only existed in books and movies. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+205d8b446a4b,A50C90D2A2A0,If you thought that you would be wrong the places in books are sometimes real and sometimes not and if you want to help people and go on a advencher this is the job for you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94391581009f,A50C90D2A2A0,The perks of this job would be the trip and if a cow dies of old age it is a steak cook out and you can see more animals you thought possible in a bout. The sea is a inportant part of the job and if you are scard of water then this job is not for you ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5ef88b633cf,A50C90D2A2A0,Now the sites of a seagoing cowboy are absolutely amassing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3f66211ca6e,A50C90D2A2A0,you could see greece and the Parthonon and rome with the romen coloseum and china with it's large 16th cenchery builidings and spain with it's large docks with large sea vesalls and englend and buckinghem palice and the tower of london and big ben and germeny the starting place of the war and home of hitller and berlin. If you like steak and other meat meals then you have to eat somthing different then your favoret meals becase of the cow on the ship the might get a little wored and start to get out of control but dount let a cow stop you from bring a seagoing cow boy and help with the things we need the do to help thoughts in need. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+587a5a9e9976,A50C90D2A2A0,If you dount have patince then this job is not the job for you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3da0ec083190,A588F05DC41F,"Would you want summer to be filled to the brim with boring assigments made by your teacher instead of enjoying some of your only time off school? If teachers were to construct summer projects they wouldn't be fun at all. Summer vacation is something to get excited for, not to dread. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4a1ffd29cb85,A588F05DC41F,The teachers' projects would create anxiety for many but letting the students take the wheel could be interesting ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5c7af59c6758,A588F05DC41F,The students could think of projects to not only work their minds while on break ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1dacec89d690,A588F05DC41F,enjoy and appreciate what they've done. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe75d3349d0e,A588F05DC41F,Teachers have a hard time giving work that is both challenging and rewarding ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3652951f911,A588F05DC41F,"If they make a fun assignment, it must be easy. This is true for the opposite: If the make a challenging assignment it's garenteed to be boring. If they let the students make the summer projects they might find a perfect blend of the two. They would make something that requires skill and also happens to be exciting to do.
+
+The taachers' projects would for a fact bring anxiety and depression for a magority of people becasue summer is a time for them to relax and regroup. Some teachers may not understand this concept or try to pass it off as no big deal. Students know what it's like so they could create projects that don't feel overwelming or unfair. It could be a compremise between the students and the teachers to get done the things they need to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91ae8ada9916,A588F05DC41F,"Over the course of summer, the projects might be forgotten if the teachers were to make them because no one enjoys them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+389ee5e09508,A588F05DC41F,"To ensure that the projects don't get lost, students would have to think of ideas that would make the projects a blast to get though. Ideas like travelling the world and recording the experience could be trilling and get the gears turning in the students brains. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c17b9faeb8b1,A588F05DC41F,"eaving it to the student population of the school to make the projects would keep these projects enjoyable, challenging, and overall painless. This project would be like ripping off a bandage really quick to get it done without pain and have fun the rest of break.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bedec0b33cb9,A5C943C27546,The author supports that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers represents. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+624ceb04911e,A5C943C27546,Venus is a planet closest to Earth. It's conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth. Venus may be the most Earth-like plannet in our solar system. Venus has more characteristics than Earth does. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c051d06ee1db,A5C943C27546,Veus conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+885fed40f466,A5C943C27546,"Venus has the hottest surface of any planet in our solar system. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. It is crazy imaging Venus having way more pressure than Earth. The text sasy, ""Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupying volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes."" This shows that Venus has many powerful climate changes. The author states this becaue, he wants to inform us how dangers Venus can be, but yet so interesting and gives readers want to know more of it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+228d6a8ba54e,A5C943C27546,"According to the article, Venus may be the most Earth- like plannet in our solar system ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f0a8b9d14c4,A5C943C27546,"The text says, ""Often referred to as Earth's twin."" Venus is closest planet to earth in terms of density and size. This shows that people may know Venus as a different version as Earth. This relates that the author supports the idea of studying Venus is worthy because it is very similar to Earth, so why not study it and explore it? The author may think that Venus can be somewhere people can survive in and look more forward to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+742df14e4cce,A5C943C27546,Venus has way more characteristics than Earth does. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+18727c28fc59,A5C943C27546,"The author stated how it is the hottest surface temperature, more powerful climate cahnges, more atmospheric pressure, etc. Venus is a unique planet. The author want us to invest more to Venus, because it has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f4e17932c736,A5C943C27546,"Venus has dangers it despites, but can be so interesting to invest more on. The author thinks Venus may be the most earth-like plannet in our system. It is like Earth's 'twin'. So, if it's similar to Earth, why not look more forward to studying Venus. It is important to know what's surrounded in Earth.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e2f4301b351e,A5DA0D5410DE,"My principal recently decided that all students should participate in an extra curricular activity, and I totally agree. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+99b9f7145e03,A5DA0D5410DE,"I think every student should participate in an activity like sports, a musical in s trument class, or some sort of club. This would help students to learn and develop talents and skills ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8e7d0619a56f,A5DA0D5410DE,Also it would give students a time to socialize with people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fee1a71c6bdc,A5DA0D5410DE,If students do after schools activities like sports they will be able to exercise and practice coordination with friends. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fe8366e1ab72,A5DA0D5410DE,"Sports will make students to grow to strong and get lots of sunlight. Learning an instrument has been proven to make people smarter. But not just in music, in other curriculum too. Also there is a lot of different clubs out there that can help people with getting jobs or just learn a hobbie too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+41bd45cbd14f,A5DA0D5410DE,One big thing that I will really like about this is that it gives students more time to socialize mwith friends ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1453c0c2e206,A5DA0D5410DE,This will also give practice of big social skills you will use through your life. These skill will help get jobs for students later in their life. With an extra hour or two to spend time with peers and teachers they will get alot of practice. But most of all give students a fun time after spending all their day at school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72fa119464a0,A5DA0D5410DE,"the principals decision on students participating in extra curricular activities would good for me and my peers. It will give students time to develop and grow their skills, like coordination, knowledge of a topic or hobbies. Also it would give students time to socialize, grow social skills and have fun. So in the end the principals decision is great.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1d21330d1595,A615D47180DF,The author uses many details from the article to support his claim that Venus is worthy pursuit desipte the dangers it presents by telling the reader how dangerous Venes is. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7c9148572eb9,A615D47180DF,"the author tells us about some details about the temperatures, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c61ef884fc94,A615D47180DF,"like how it would be around 170 fahenheit there. The air pressure would be close to sea level on earth. These details he gives us about the conditions Venus has are far to exterme, but the author says it survivable for humans. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abe65428a5c4,A615D47180DF,"A second, detail that the author gives use is about NASA trying to collect samples of rocks so they can study ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+113e9ec30d79,A615D47180DF,"But most of the robots they send to Venus get destroyed because of the choas that happens there. Another project that they did was that they used technology called mechanical computers. These mechanical conputers are are powerful, flexible, and quick but the are delicate when it comes to extreme conditions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8fec088dec76,A615D47180DF,"A third detial, that the author gave us information about the text was that not even a single space ship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+998fe053a3db,A615D47180DF,The author also goes on to say how the more challenging the place is the more they examine more closely. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. The Earth and Venus aslo orbits the sun in different times so its harder to vist it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+48a53fe63b55,A615D47180DF,"In Conclustion, Venus is very hard to get to because of it condtions there but it is survivable for humans. NASA has tried many times to get on Venus but they have failed many times. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1826744886de,A615D47180DF,i think the autor supports his claim really well with the detail he gives us. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f2166975fe7b,A620127943B6,I strongly disagree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c42b8aa9a31f,A620127943B6,some students don't want to participate in extracurricular activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d7534bd9200,A620127943B6,Most of the student body have things to do afterschool and they can't attend both at the same time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08a8307711f2,A620127943B6,Our principles shouldn't make somone do something if they don't want to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f4086ca8e5d,A620127943B6, If the parents don't want their kid staying for extacurricular activites then they shouldn't because what if the parents have something to do with their kids afterschool or they have a doctors appointement. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7bb80f56c77,A620127943B6,Majority of the student body at our school doesn't know how to play sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+644093dabf55,A620127943B6,"The coaches at our school put people on the team that doesn't know how to play. What's the purpose of having a team with people that don't know what is going on during the games. If the students dont want to play something the shouldn't be forced to do something they don't want to do. Sport require effort to put yourself on the field and not mess up in front of the coach so that you would be able to make the team and not be embarrassed to not see your name ont the paper while eveyone that made it is celebrating. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3411752766a6,A620127943B6,A lot of the student body gets upset because the president promises something and it never happenes and then it turns in a big rivarly between everyone. We learn abut politics in our geography and i think the us as the student body shouldn't be worried about politics as much because then the student body will think that it is ok to do what the politics do and say. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62a526a62e4b,A620127943B6,In conclusion i stated that i strongly disagree because not everyone has the ability to do certain things that others can. I feel that if the students don't want to do extracurricular activites then they shouldn't be made to because they don't want to go out there looking ike a fool or run for president and not make it because they didnt have enough votes. The year book is something that requires a lot of effort and time and not alot of people have pateince to be able to handle what they have to do. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+787522308f7c,A62EBECE741D,I agree because all students should do something fun and move around ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3287abeb6625,A62EBECE741D,"Most students would rather sit than play sports, so they can still do something active with the yearbook. All students should at lest do one activity rather than academics. This decision should be allowed if a student wants to do a activity or not. Would you want to participate in a extracurricular activity? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69a2ff51d86c,A62EBECE741D,I agree because students move around when playing sports ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28860de5877f,A62EBECE741D,"Most students that play in a team could play the sports that they like. You can start feeling healthy after a game of any sport, and students can enjoy the nature when there outside. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+847cc60ec5df,A62EBECE741D,"Students can help out with yearbooks, as a result they can design the front cover of the year book ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b5d74471a3cb,A62EBECE741D,Lots of students like art work from the front cover and will want a yearbook ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb721cfdd2cc,A62EBECE741D,Students can serve on students council which helps other students with disorders. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+65672857f223,A62EBECE741D,They will be appreciated in what they are doing for others and the rest of the students will be happy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1112131a848e,A62EBECE741D,"thats why I agree, so students can be active during school hours. Some students would rather sit and work with the yearbook. Some just want to help other people in the school. All academics should be for one half of school time and activity the second half. The activities would help students refresh their brains and forget the things they are going through. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d9cea3b1f6c5,A63EC24F1DD4,"In 1988 a Viking 1 took a, slightly disturbing, picture. Of a face! Viking 1 found a landform that happends to look like an Egyptian Pharoah. This face was found and started major controversy.
+
+Some people had thought that it was fake and others thought that it was just a coincidence. The massive sand storms just created a face. That's all that they thought. But can that be true? 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+6af638cf76bf,A63EC24F1DD4,"The face on Mars really hit it off on Earth. Everyone was talking about it. "" The ""Face on Mars"" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery story chechout lines for 25 years!"" Some people believe that this face was created by aliens; it is a sign of life on Mars. But, ""few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact."" That is just crazy, but scientists are backing it up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55dafac435c9,A63EC24F1DD4,There is no proof for it to be alien made. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa2f48460f1f,A63EC24F1DD4,"Certain people still say that ""it's aliens, aliens are making these faces!"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d1ba3366f2f1,A63EC24F1DD4,"That is not true without the evidence. Which, there is none. There are ablolutly zero facts that aliens would be able to make a face. Or that there are aliens. No facts. No aliens. If there were aliens how would they even make a face? 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+75b3fec6bb03,A63EC24F1DD4,This has to be just a natural landform that formed when a massive sandstorm hit ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9cd9ffacb2a,A63EC24F1DD4,"It is just a coincidence. Nothing freaky or wierd, just a face in the sand. It's natural, not an alien. According to the text, ""What the picture actually shwos is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West."" See, nothing wierd going on on Mars. Or at least that we know of. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3051140ad7c,A63EC24F1DD4,"So, in conclusion, this artifact of mars is real. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d1fff587424f,A63EC24F1DD4,"This is, because, there are no facts to prove otherwise. If there were facts than it would be ruled an alien artifact. Which would be pretty cool, but it isn't real. And we shouldn't be pretending like it is real. Scientists are backing this up here they are saying that it can't be an alien artifact. It's impossible as of right now. There is no evidence that an alien has made this face in the sand. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a819ab5fd573,A6527612255D,Technology has made a big impact on the world today. The number problem with technology is CELL PHONES! We use cell phones all day and night. There have been so many accidents and mostly the cost of texting and driving. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+451590e594a7,A6527612255D,I think that drivers should not be able to use their phones while driving but only if emergency & navigation. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89e31837acb6,A6527612255D,This will lead to lower accidents in the u. s. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80e2f1f5f24a,A6527612255D,"We all want to be on are phones every minute and every second but here are some facts that will make you think twice before picking up the phone. Approximately 600,000 drivers are attempting to use their phones while behind the wheel of an automobile. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf8cf7e8b8b2,A6527612255D,"There are nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents while texting and driving. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9145310579b8,A6527612255D,"On the day of July 1, 2018 a new law saying that "" Drivers cannot have a phone in their HAND or touching any part of their body while talking on their phone while driving"". Meaning you will get a ticket ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e9ffd149c73,A6527612255D,i'm pretty sure that nobody wants to get a 150-250 dollar ticket for doing something stupid. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b1a42893ff0,A6527612255D,"It's really sad when you think about it, people have developed skills and strategies to make it look like they're not on the phone. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+334acbcaafa9,A6527612255D,People often feel like they will miss something and separated from the world when they aren't on their phone. So many many lives have been taken just because a single text or a single call. Thousands are dying and being injured. So no cell phones shouldn't be able to be used while driving.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b1b1e541754f,A65A82E9C85D,"Some new computer softwar that recognize emotions. The software is the latest innovation from prof. New techology experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. But each expression is compared against a neutral face. But the computers can identify human emotions like happy, fearful, angry and sad.
+
+The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. To faces more expressive the can tell how the person feel sad, angey and happy. Also the video the people can play with friend in school or in online. When student are bored they can play video game and make their happy. The hospital use technology for video surgy. Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. so computer need to understand that, too.
+
+imagine a computer that knows when you happpy or sad ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dcf5c6cca1bc,A65A82E9C85D,Technology can make thing better but some technology can make thing worse. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5aded4db02f8,A68BE59D62B4,"I feel like that technology can't tell if you happy, sad, anger, or disgusted by anything because you can just make any face in it can just say what it is i mean i'm not saying that technology not smart now days, i know that technology can do all type of things ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d84dfb1bdd94,A68BE59D62B4,i feel like we don't need them type of thing in the classroom. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+482a677184e8,A68BE59D62B4,I feel like people don't want to show they feelings a lot of people want keep things to they self. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c1ca69a77e8,A68BE59D62B4,We all want keep a lot of thing to are self the face scan reading people emotional not right but if people something deep i feel like you should share because you can't hide a lot in things in life i feel like it the sametime we should and shouldn't have this face scaning emotional. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+02ba5c5852a6,A68BE59D62B4,"I feel like people think it good to have for them self i feel like we should get it because a lot of human perform this impressive ""calclulation"" everyday because you can probably tell how friend is feeling simply by look on her face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1a9a47d1d074,A68BE59D62B4,But to be on the safe side we can tell how people are doing because some people be lying about how they feel. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+22db43f0f354,A68BE59D62B4,"Would you every use technology to read students emotional?
+
+Yes so i can tell how they are doing and if the feeling well or bad today i feel like students should show they feeling because we would know how i person feel intel they tell us. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0ea115262f3f,A69B61336132,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during thier break. Do you think that these summer projects should be student-designed or teacher- designed? Many people feel that it should be student-designed and others feel it should be teacher-designed. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+08a08ed5ea1a,A69B61336132,Students should design the summer projects that they have to do. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f537f08d7d8b,A69B61336132,The projects should be student-designed because they can make it fun and it would give them more of a desire to actually do the project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35eec0debb1c,A69B61336132,"The students can make it more fun because they know what the enjoy doing over summer or what they would be able to make fun. They would have more of a desire to do it because they made it and because it would be fun and not completely complicated. For example, Generic_Name and her classmates had to do a summer project and their teachers designed the project. Generic_Name and her friends didnt do the project because whenever they got ready to do it together a couple of them got bored with it because it was not fun and the other students did not complete it because it was too complicated for them to do. That is one reason as to why I believe that students should design their own summer projects. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0ed89f8b9b2,A69B61336132,If a student designs their own summer projects they will more than likely do a better job on it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f43d96703bd,A69B61336132,"Students are just like everyone else and they do a better job on something they made up themselves. Students like to do their own things and if a teacher desnigned the project they would not be able to enjoy it and do a better job on it. For example, Mrs. Generic_Name gave have her class a specific summer project they had to do and she allowed the other half of her class to choose what they would like to do for a project. They students that did not get to choose their project either did not do it or did not get that well of a grade on it because they were not at all interested in it. However, the students that did get to choose thier projects did complete it and they all did very well on it. That is way in my opinion, teadcher should not design the summer projects for students, but students should design the projects themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e078d3de31f,A69B61336132,If teachers designed the summer projects they would have more indepth questions and work to do that would get students brains thinking and learning. Teacher also know all of the critearia that has to be followed. Teachers are able to make projects fun and enjoyable as well as give the students a little stuggle with the work so they would actually be learning instead of just flying right through the project. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+549d8f09c8b5,A69B61336132,"I do still believe that students should design their own projects. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+964e0f5f526f,A69B61336132,my opinion is that students should design their own summer projects because they know what they like for fun things and they would do a better job on their project if they designed it. I do see how it would benifit if teachers designed it however students would still do a better job on it and have more fun and do it on time if they designed the summer project themselves. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d647799ce0ac,A7431EE1E25B,The author does not support the idea that studyng Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because he or she provides no explanation of facts stated and creates conflicting ideas that cast a grim shadow on travel to Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bac7a07ea6c0,A7431EE1E25B,"First, the author doesn't support the idea effectively because he or she presents facts without explaining the significance or importance of them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+80f2747874e7,A7431EE1E25B,"While describing why scientists consider visits to venus, the author states ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in out solar system...The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable""(4).
+
+By presenting that scientists want to visit Venus then almost immediately jumping to the weak conclusion that the ""value of returning to Venus seems indisputable"", the author fails to explain why the scientists want to visit Venus and why those reasons are important or significant.
+
+Without an explanation of facts, writers leave the reader to create conclusions in their own minds, possibly without a complete understanding, weakening the authors support of his or her own claim or idea. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+75bcbe2d23e1,A7431EE1E25B,"Second, the author doesn't support the idea effectively because he or she creates the picture in the reader's mind that successful and worthwhile travel to Venus is nearly impossible and certainly not attainable with today's technology. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b61eabe00754,A7431EE1E25B,"While writing on what would be necessary for travel and observation of Venus, the author states ""a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions...[and be] survivable for humans.
+
+However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions...[Also,] standard forms of photography...[would be] innefective...Therefore, sciendtists seeking to...understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks""(5).
+
+By stating that ""a vehicle hovering over Venus"" would be safe for humans and then directly stating that it would not be enough and that scientists who want useful information would have to ""get up close and personal despite the risks"", the author states conflicting ideas.
+
+In addition, earlier in the passage the author states ""On the planet's surgace, temperatures average over 800 degrees""(3).
+
+This creates another serious flaw in the author's idea, because the conditions stated are not even close to survivable. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4975a2111405,A7431EE1E25B,"Combining the evidence presented by the author would point to the conclusion that astronomers would need to be using vehicles and photography equipment that currently don't exist and, even with unavailable technology, they must be willing to die to travel to Venus for study.
+
+This creates the idea in the reader's head that studying Venus is impossible, which greatly weakens the author's claim.
+
+All in all, impossibilities, conflicting ideas, and a lack of explanation of evidence crontribute to a weak argument in favor of the idea that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7de7f065f585,A7AF38D7EB8F,"People, Muesums, and Schools are still wandering ""to this day"" if Leonardo Da Vinci made his famous painting of Mona Lisa with a smile on ""her"" face, well, in Paragraph 1(Lines 1-2), there is a descripion of how Nick D'Alto is saying that Mona Lisa is Eighty-Three percent happy, Nine percent disgusted, Six percent fearful, and Two percent angry. The new technology system being described in the
+
+Facial Action Coding System (suggested by Dr. Huang) could possibly make a big difference of how Mona Lisa ""REALLY FEELS"", and how it would be easier for students to learn about whether or not ""She"" was made ""HAPPY"" in Da'Vinci's paintings. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+830c06ab1a40,A7AF38D7EB8F,"Some students in the Twenty-First Century are not willing to learn about certain topics in school because of all the other amazing internet resources and games they think are part of computer freedom, but inspite of Three- Dimentinal vision, Mona Lisa could have been much angrier than what she might have seemed like in her face, and she might have been fearful because of her hair style and her looks ""in the dark!"" Maybe, there was a possibility that a demostration of Mona Lisa could test how well with a(n) computer with ""2020 Vision Software"", or have a(n) emotional sensor flashdrive to attach to your PC Engine when you want there to be certain conducting over feelings from your computer technology ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d513425ced9c,A7AF38D7EB8F,"I think that this kind of technology is kind of un-realistic, but it would be a good source for what the person studying in will thinks about what he learned in the past ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f776e5d1d790,A7AF38D7EB8F,"""Once enough of the Life-Story of the person has gone by."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7751ed4f92a,A7AF38D7EB8F,"I would imagine that constructing a computer that has a lot of functions and features could lack the knowledge of a person's understanding of how to ""USE"" the computer properly, which will turn out to be more like ""TRASHWARE"" than ""SOFTWARE"" ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+49d4b284fda6,A7AF38D7EB8F,"The biggest part I think the Facial Action Coding System ""Is Worth"" is how you can just control anything in your ""IMAGINATION"" to discover the strong ways that you can make video games from your imagination, show how you truly feel, and picture yourself "" in that video game."" Dr. Huang is not a bad ""Pre- Innovator"", but he could have added specific date(s) to his context. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44df64e762ad,A7AF38D7EB8F,"If a type of computer with 3-D software were to exist, then there would be a great possibility that by Two- Thousand Twenty, there will be the greatest chance of a computer with special features existing ""if Dr. Huang will start planning how the computer he's wishing to come out will be invented."" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9a1c84ca2b8f,A7D201133DAD,"Limiting your car usage has benifits to yourself, the community and the environment. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+94e9940c0c79,A7D201133DAD,"In Vauban, Germany residents have given up their cars. In this expeirimental community, street parking, driveways, and garages are almost forbidden. Car ownership is however allowed, but the only place to park are large garages at the edge of the development. If you own a car and decide to park there, you must buy a space for $40,000, plus a home! The outcome of this has been most of the community don't own cars. ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"" this was said by Heidrun Walter, mother of two and a media trainer. Also this communities idea has been adopted around the world. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a8ddfb4bc03e,A7D201133DAD,An effect of extreme car ususe can be smog ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d4611120da1,A7D201133DAD,"Paris, France has the most smog out of all the other European capitals. They had ""147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in london, Reuters found."" After days of heavy pollution. A partial driving ban was enforced to clear the city's air. Motorists with even-numbered license plates were told to leave their cars at home. If they didn't do so, they would be charged with a 22-euro fine. The same order wouls be given to odd-numbered plates the next day. Almost 4,000 driver's cars were fined for using their cars.
+
+In Bogota, Colombia they set up a program, The day without cars it's when cars are banned and only buses and taxis are permitted. Their goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution"" stated by Carlos Arturo Plaza a businessman. The day without cars is part of an improvment campaign that began in bogota in the mid-1990's. during this year's anual day without cars, authorities from others countries have can to see the event and were very pleased by it. "" These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders"" said by Enrique Riera, the major of Asunci`on, Paraguay.
+
+In recent studies it's shown that Americans are buying fewer cars, getting less lincenses, and driving less as each year goes by. Many beleive America's love for cars is deteriorating. The number of miles driven has gone down since 2005. Some think it's because we simpliy can't afford new cars.""A study last year found driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009"" Even the number of cars per home has gone down. ""What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn"" said by Michael Sivak, a research professor at the University of Michigan's Transportation Research Institute. If this patterns persists it will be very benificial to the environment. Mimi Sheller, a sociology professer at Drexel University thinks the internet makes people feel more connected, therefore we don't feel the need to drive out and meet friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7780fafecac8,A7D201133DAD,limiting your car usage benifits you and the environment. As quoted in the essay people express how they feel less stressed from not using their cars. Countries and communities around the world are taking part in less car usage and feeling great from it. So i advise you do the same and help yourself and the environment.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+205eca5ce254,A831BFD2DCBE,In this article or passage the author idea was to explore venues more find out what are it values. because if earth would suffer a damage of nature venues would be the only safe place for humans ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+71bd7e0438e8,A831BFD2DCBE,but first of all water got to be in venues in other for human to stay a live why because us the human ca not live without whater why because we need it to drink it also we need it for our crops to grow an give us fruits and vestables for our food. scientist think that onces there was water in venues if fresh air could be infume by humans there's could be a chage that human would survive out of space in a different planet. scientist are peeking over venues to get rock samples also air sample to see the enviroment values on fact about venues is that is one of the closets plate to the sun which means that the climate there is going to be high cause the planet being clos to the sun and that why we need water in venues cause of it's high temperatures humans would be thirsty for water. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d533b922879,A8A25F94F5B6,i think we should use the facial action because you can go anywhere and see how pepole are today to see if they are mad or angery sad and etc ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c99f472853b9,A8A25F94F5B6,The facial action coding system should be use in class room ,Position,Adequate,,,
+de7dfe99709d,A8A25F94F5B6,we can see how student are feeling and to see if they are having a good day or a bad day ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3688b96a110d,A8A25F94F5B6,we can use the facial action coding system to see there facial expersion to every student in class ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a8d4979f3f7,A8A25F94F5B6,in a way did making a happy face make you slightly happy in the artical it tells us by making a happy face your muscles not only expresses emtions but they will also may even help produce them ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4324d4876a9,A8A25F94F5B6,"Yes we should use the facial action coding system in schools or anywhere in stores,work,airports so we can see how peoples facial expresions are ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f8fc0a649c5,A8A25F94F5B6,so we can see if can help them or talk to them so they can have a smile on there faces ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a78b0489850,A8BBE9026DC2,"I would like to talk to you about car-free cities it is about 70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars and another thing about this article is tat 57 percent sold a car to move to german and that in 2006, the united states was to seperate suburban life from the auto as a componenet of traveling and another word for hat is smart planning. and a most important fact is that 12 percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in europe is up to 50 percent in some car -intensive areas in the united states .and in 1950 percent in the town of levittown are still exert a strong appeal.
+
+next, in paris ban driving due to smog and it talks about almost 4,000 drivers were fined,according to an international news agency headquartered in london. And the gas prices for diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in france, compared with 114 in brussels and that 79.7 in london reuters found. and the next reasn is that 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe, according to reuters. and that it was the third straight  year cars have been banned with only buses  and taxis permmited for the day without cars in this capital city of 7 milllion. the goal is that to promote aletrnative transporation and reduce smog. and faced of a fine of $25 fines. and in april in 2013 the number, of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below he peak and equal to where the country was in january 1995. because, cash- strapped americans could not afford new cars now. and that now that they recoverd is under way.  the next few years will be telling. what most intrigues me is that rates of cars ownersip per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn. next reason is that a study last ear found that driing by young people decresased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. and that at an initial stage begginning to happen or they develop. and that a famous street in paris and that car traffic  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de970ad3347b,A8C8456C352B,My claim for this story is people are trying see how are people feeling in a picture and trying to hdie thir emotions ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0e19484df565,A8C8456C352B,"My quote from the story is ""Imagine being able to dectect exactly how other people are feelings, even when they are trying to hide their emotions.
+
+Mona Lisa is in the picture, she 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. At some schools there are some computers sofware that can recognize emotions but not all of them. Dr. Huang is terying to find better ways for humans and computers to communicate. they are suing alot of techology to find how are people emotions in the picture. I know when people lok at a picture people wanna know how are that person is feeling in that picture.
+
+Dr. Huang is putting the computer constructs in 3D and trying to put 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Eckman has classified six basic emotions like happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. when your in a picture your going to have some type of face expression. It all depends on what type of face that the person in the picture is looking like. Even your mouth can depend if your face expression is good or bad by tighting your lips to show anger.
+
+When your round people you can tell their face expression just by the look of their face. A lot of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy. And their face expressions can depend on how their hair looks. If their hair looks all over the place its probably bad and if their hair looks all nice its probably happy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3363d78e8320,A8C8456C352B,"My conclusion is to find someone feelsing is look ing at their face and their hai and how their face looks. Just like actors be doing reproduce smilling and frowning. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.  ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+95e350f58b01,A8D21847EA6D,The author explains to us how worthy it is to study Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bceaa92d9ddf,A8D21847EA6D,for example in the articel he claimes that Venus has so many features like earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a4ee6f480e8,A8D21847EA6D,for example like an ocean or a mountain he alos said there could even be some type of life form that could live there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c7746ca4f8f,A8D21847EA6D,There has been more and more people wanting to study this because of the fact that this one day might become another earth that we can live on and form some type of life on there but people have to test it out to see if we are able to live there for example to see if any animal life form can live there or even start bringing other to Venus for some testing. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+333b0c18295e,A8D21847EA6D,"The big issue though is that the tempture gets really high like around 800 degrees for example it siads that ""Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volecanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightn skrikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c99e4c532238,A8D21847EA6D,"For example in paragraph 5 it saids "" The National Aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA's possible solutions to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Vesusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms , a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of there way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface , temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be plentiful,and radiation would notexceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable enough for humans."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0888cbb38c3e,A8D9AE4B4259,"Imagine this routine. Wake up, go to school, come home, do homework, go to bed, repeat. Sounds boring right? But somewhere between those steps, imagine doing an activity that you love. Makes it a lot more fun doesn't it? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1dd150545579,A8D9AE4B4259,I believe that all students should participate in an extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+617f902b896d,A8D9AE4B4259,"it helps them try new things, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e01b0b58dfab,A8D9AE4B4259,"I am also in an extracurricular activity, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d7dd7ac8f201,A8D9AE4B4259,it allows people to focus on something besides schoolwork. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+89a46f8bbf62,A8D9AE4B4259,"It's hard to try a new thing because it's scary to get out of your comfort zone. But very soon, it can become enjoyable and fun. Meeting new people is always a great thing to do in an activity. The students will get new friends and it will let them have someone to do the activity with. In activities, a lot of people come in not knowing that they may be good at it. Participating in activities can help someone find their ""thing"". Extracurricular activities let students try new things that help them find out whether or not they like it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d7f10fc31cc5,A8D9AE4B4259,I am involved in dance and it has really helped me become a more diverse person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d82e2f2ef1d8,A8D9AE4B4259,"I have been dancing since I was three years old and I only did ballet back then but as I got older I started more styles such as tap, jazz, lyrical, musical theatre, contemporary, and I still do ballet. Doing all of those styles has made me a versatile dancer. On average I dance about 14 hours a week and it's incredibly tiring but it's also my passion and I love it. I wouldn't want to be doing anything else. Dancing has made me branch out, make new friends, and do what I love. Doing this activity has helped me figure out what I want to be doing forever. Being involved in dance has let me find out my passion and allowed me to become a stronger person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f2b0f995f036,A8D9AE4B4259,"A lot of people just go to school, come home, do homework, and then just sit around doing nothing. It's get boring but activities let students do something fun. Schoolwork can become stressful if that's all that someone does. Sometimes focusing on something else can help take their mind off of it. Extracurricular activities can be relaxing. For example, some people do yoga or paint to forget about their stress. Those things can help people not stress as much. Activities allow kids to work on something non-school related. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea8675ccdb7a,A8D9AE4B4259,"it's clear that out of school activities are great for students because it helps them try new things, I am in an activity and I love it, and it allows kids to do something besides schoolwork. I think that all students should do an extracurricular activity that they love.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+96a38b6b6b7f,A8FD11F16108,"This painting is was made a long time ago. Many people found this painting weird because, back then there wasn't a lot of people happy, also poor. So when you see this picture this girl is happy and looks like she has nice cloths on. People took this picutre into inspiration. And brought a lot to the picture. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a6734981cd68,A8FD11F16108,In my perceptative I like this idea but then I don't ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+80ad55198ef5,A8FD11F16108,"It is pretty nice that we have a software that can be able to do something like this. it is pretty cool to tell people that we need a picture of you or someone and we will see how happy you are, how mad you are, etc. But I'm really not for it that much. There can be more things we can do instead of doing this. But doing this picture was preety cool. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+337c01b0b038,A8FD11F16108,In paragrpah 5 it states that people can tell how your friend is feeling simply by the look on their face. I totally agree with it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+40a1719f82d2,A8FD11F16108,If this is your best friend and they are the same to you when you see each other you should smile. But when they don't and still look down then you know there is a problem. Friends are there for each other. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f7b6bfaa00f,A8FD11F16108,One thing that I argue about this is on paragrpah 6. When you are happy then when a ad pops up then it should be happy. Same way if you were mad then a mad or something down ad will pop up. I don't really agree to this because when people see ads they dont really pay attention to ads. When they see an ad they look at the close button for it and they close it. But if there is an advertisment they of coarse people will have to watch it until the ad is over ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03aaeb48cac5,A8FD11F16108,"I don't like the idea that computers should have computer appresions on what we do. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b803e205c10d,A8FD11F16108,"This article is very good. I like this but of coarse there are some down falls to everything. I like how they did this software on ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" becuase this picture inspired other people. But the computer expressions isn't a good idea. They aren't doing this for a good cause. When people have a chance to skip an ad or an advertisment they will. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a6089cd3d385,A90D70556372,Do you think that a new technology called Facial Action Coding System an enables computer to identifyhuman emotions can tell your emotion.? I think that its true because you can look at someone and tell how they're feeling. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0aa50ff78411,A90D70556372,In my mind i think i can tell how a person is feeling. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4e27518bb124,A90D70556372,"If it happy, sad man depressed, or even just trying to hid it. Even your friends and family . For example in the article it says "" In fact, we humans perform this same impressive "" calculation"" every da. for instance, you can oribably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of cours, most of us would hve trouble actually describing ech facil trait that conveys happy, worried, etc."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28cf681399ae,A90D70556372,So yes i think that this technology can tell emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ffa3174b1d4,A90D70556372,some students get bored easy and with technology like this it could helo that from happening. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+51231f2cf2f4,A92899103F3B,"How can a facial action coding system can identify a persons initial facial exspretion? Well what it does and how it can be helpful, useful and then it can solv a lot of mystreys in some cases ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1b0cb0140c50,A92899103F3B,"If somebody can tell what feelings there exspressing can be helpful in a way by telling somebody like a doctors that studys people when there just angry, sad or happy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a97f49cdc23,A92899103F3B,that tecnology can help when others are in a certain state of depresion and that certain somebody doesent want to be noticed that machine can help with a person they may commit suicide. When no one knows it but the machiene can tell if there just trying to put on a good face over a really bad time. So then how can it be useful it will also sovle some unusal cases like some artisis make and no one will ever understand what they were trying to go for inside the person. Like the Mona Lisa some people will probably never understand what if just is smiling or grining for the picture ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f1644083158,A92899103F3B,If this invention coms out permanatly that it can show a poll of how kids view homework and then show how some people view work places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c2800226088,A92899103F3B,If they are dicustuing or just p a place you dont want to goto. Then it also solves the basic stuff like make face detecting how people fell about some presidents andit can solve cases if a person was happy or he was mad to tell if a person was a killer or not ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65015f4c08ed,A92899103F3B,in conclusion I think it is very useful in my opinon and I hope they make more of these inventions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb86df0d1283,A93C6DA5B026,The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by explaining and reasoning about Venus. Venus is a simple to see from the distant. Each previous mission was unmanned. Venus is a challenging planet and no spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7347d687f57b,A93C6DA5B026,I believe that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of dangers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d702136f9c56,A93C6DA5B026,because it's a challenging place to examine more closely ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73cc29785747,A93C6DA5B026,has different speeds ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+36e655f2dee7,A93C6DA5B026,and the atmosphere and heat ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbd1b19bc333,A93C6DA5B026,"Venus is sometimes called the ""Evening Star,"" is one of the brightest points of the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. Venus is the second planet from our sun. The nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd05399b59af,A93C6DA5B026,"According to Paragraph 1 it says that, ""While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8af57d74b046,A93C6DA5B026,This quote states that Venus is danger and challenging to observe. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c40b1414288,A93C6DA5B026,"Venus is oftened referred to as Earth's ""twin"". Earth and Venus orbit different speeds. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f057d93cd864,A93C6DA5B026,"These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world. Each previous missions was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. This issue explains why not a single spaceship had landed on Venus and numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f759f2da52db,A93C6DA5B026,"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on our own planet ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4d851197ce6,A93C6DA5B026,These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Venus does not have any easy conditions since it's dangerous but survivable for humans. Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+54f2bc2867f1,A93C6DA5B026,"Strivinng to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Venus has many more experinces to go and finding out more about it. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be exapned to meet very edges of imagination and innovation. Venus can sometimes be worthy pursuit despite the dangers.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b07e9e674227,A954E3B54194,"Brock was walking in the woods along the creek. At the edge of the water, he saw something that made a body type figure. Brock went down to see if it was a body, but when he got down there, it was really hard to see if it was a body because of the running water. He went back up to where he saw the body, and he coud see it clearly again. He took a picture of the body figure and sent it to the Elkart County Lab. They went to take a look at it and they posted the picture sent from Brock online. Most of the people who saw it, including some of the scientist, thought it was some sort of alien figure. They dug it out and found it to be a rock formed into a body shape by the shadows of the water, and the erosion that has been done to the rock ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9e2272ac1207,A954E3B54194,I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+01d540bf3e1d,A954E3B54194,"because it isn't an alien formation, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a15ac899493d,A954E3B54194,"you can see what it is made of, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24d67c572682,A954E3B54194,"there are other landforms that may look real, but it isn't real. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a02c58f1263c,A954E3B54194,One example that proves my claim is that the author explains in the excerpt that it isn't an alien formation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+055b9501bfaa,A954E3B54194,"The author states that Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. This photo revealed that it was just a natural landform, not an alien monument. The author also states that it has unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+98720b9308e9,A954E3B54194,"Another example that demonstrates my claim is that according to the author, you can see what it is made of ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+abd746024340,A954E3B54194,"The author shows that the huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, is formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. The author also states that Garvin said, ""as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size, so if there were objects in this picture like, airplaines on the ground, or Egytian-style pyramids, or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ac015a8babf1,A954E3B54194,"A final example that proves my claim is that the author demonstrates that there are other landforms that may look real, but it isn't real ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5fbc44ca2e8,A954E3B54194,"The author states that scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa when the face appeared. This shows that they have seen things like this before and they knew that it wasn't real, or alien like. Another example that the author proves is that Garvin said it reminded him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face and perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze. Also NASA can be hidding information about the Face. But, you can see that the Face is formed by shadows, and not an alien haze. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0914d32c02c9,A954E3B54194,"Now I hoped I gave you enough information to convince you that the Face is just a natural landform, and not created by aliens.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8fc6076391ef,A969E6903C17,"In the article ''Unmasking the Face on Mars''
+
+NASA talks about how a spacecraft was circling the planet mars snapping possible landing sites for another spacecraft. When it suddenly spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face it seemed to be smiling back at the cameras. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7a77954db9ce,A969E6903C17,The likeness face of a human most of been a rock formation as said in the article or a landing of an spacecrft or even from a take off but there so no such thing as aliens that would do that or they don't even exists. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+16e230cfeeb3,A969E6903C17,They even mentioned in the artilce how the cameras on board of MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face clearly ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92e1f57c2fa7,A969E6903C17,but skeptics a different thing. That pobably aliens makings were being hidden by the haze. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a859274af260,A969E6903C17,"Which were not likely it could of been the air,because the human like face was located in the north martian latitude where it was already winter. It could of been the breeze from the snow. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e7c492a08e2e,A969E6903C17,Who would think that aliens would do that if they knew we were going to spot it evenutly. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ed5776ee8f4,A969E6903C17,The picture that was taken in 2001 was more bigger and more proseize on what we would of been looking at then it was in 1976. The picture that was taken in 2001 made people see that there was nothing to worry about and that it was just a rock looking like a face. People even made it famous without knowing what it was at the time but then people saw the picture takened in 2001 that they had nothing be afraid of or suprised. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb31e2996064,A96CC7C93B2A,Having th advantage of source the population with no more cars is what i would have done. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c2fc62a7c3b5,A96CC7C93B2A,With more people driveing behind the wheel what would happen next if you step on that road to get across while a person is driving behind th wheel over 90 miles an hour. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+975a172c6a53,A96CC7C93B2A,In the U.S. there are people dying of accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8a4a0453d34,A96CC7C93B2A,drunk driveing traffic and so much more that you dont know of. How much more will suffer if a love one is dead lying there on the ground in front of your eyes in tears beacuse that person was killed by a non licesend driver. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dcca3a36006c,A96CC7C93B2A,Its rough trying too get scool in the morning know what will happen when that person is behind the wheel. A deer might jump in the way while it just got done eating its meal. Scary is what i will say it really is when you are in a situation like that once in your life. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6591634b714f,A96CC7C93B2A,People need tranportation in this world to get to places all around. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb4b9f9ab967,A96CC7C93B2A,From here to there traveling in AC while in the heat on a hot day or keeping warm with the heater on a icy but cold day. If i have a job i need a car to get there to work while I make a living to put food on the table for you and our family. Hard it is with and without a vehicle but people still made it through with or without a vehicle. In my life my parents need a vehicle to get to work on time and need it to get home from a hards day at work. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d939a881a3e,A96CC7C93B2A,To others its a dumb but a smart or nosmart thing to do but my opion is in between its a hard thing to agree on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+431c62808587,A96CC7C93B2A,Cars a effecting our population with death of people and gas and fuel that is blowing out of the rough with expenses. Prices that is excending to others minds is that is becomeing higher thatn i can ever imagine it comes and goes like in a blink of an eye you would even think it was gone until somebody told you it was. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99b268b2155b,A9B0314D6914,I go against this technology to read students emotional expressions. This is totaly BS ,Position,Adequate,,,
+489da59c6c22,A9B0314D6914,Dr. Huang and Pro. Nicu made this really cool software called the Facial Action Coding System. Calculating emotions is diferent from coding your face with a 3-D mode of your face that could barely even look like you. Plus there are more than the basic six emotion everbody has. It is still a very cool idea but not for us students. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f6cdbf7a5ae,A9B0314D6914,"Dr. Huang said that every facial emotion is universaly the same in paragraph 4, but some people can feel emotions without making that facial emotion on thier face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5903bcc27ffc,A9B0314D6914,"This software can be an evasion of privacy for students who would not like to be disterb by this software showing it to your teacher and then the teacher would call or give you a private lesson in school. Mixed emotions are even more complecated for the software to know. There are 44 major muscles in our faces are realy cool but, technology is not yet advanced for this to be true. And the Mona Lisa could just be happy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+307ad65fc9c4,A9B0314D6914,"How can this ""Facial Action Coding System"" even tell the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy. The technology is not advance enough to say what emotions we have. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b42ee2fe15a9,A9B0314D6914,"How can this software even know the emotions we have on a picture. The Mona Lisa is a painting not a picture, so that cannot be corect. Da Vinci Code is something different from Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms. Communication doesn't have to do anything with the software, but maybe us the students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6b0b7ab9411,A9B0314D6914,"And finaly this stuff can't be used in public, who is going to use this sofware than the school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aeb36a0fa781,A9B0314D6914,Video games are mostly the freedom of choice for most people . And emotional communication will still need to wait for technology to advance. Who is even gona use this. People do not caare what think about us the students. Making privat lessons based on our faces isn't a good idea. Many bad culd use this software to invade privacy from others. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df6322091c5a,A9B0314D6914,And this is my reasons why I think this software sucks and should never be used ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ed2d1fd19d51,A9D670ADCE41,"So ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" is a great little short story that includes very interesting facts a ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7ece00159fe0,A9D670ADCE41,it's all on how to go about studying the planet Venus despite the dangers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e799b619fc01,A9D670ADCE41,That's not even half of it either in other words let me give you some knowledge that I have gained from this wonderul author. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42e2e315b35e,A9D670ADCE41,"And this is where I'll tell you about the why scientists are still discussing further visits to the planet, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+05db49eccc6e,A9D670ADCE41,"so it say's in ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" that it once long ago may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system then also Venus still today has a surface of rocky sediment besides that includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters fun fact Venus is called our ""Sister Planet"". 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ec61fcafd24,A9D670ADCE41,Now let's go to some of the reason's why human-beings aren't able to survive on Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2707eb41944,A9D670ADCE41,"basically the story say's venus average temperatures are on average eight-hundred fahrenheit,the atomspheric pressure is also 90 times greater than what we experience from here on earth there for as you can see the conditions are too extreme for humans to survive on the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f86e110e03f,A9D670ADCE41,"
+Furthermore let's talk about how NASA plans to study Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+171992db7e05,A9D670ADCE41,"So NASA's solution is like imagin a bimp-like vehicle hovering thirty-plus miles above Venus to avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up there, but it doesn't mean it's not going to hot it will be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit and thje air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b67a1dad0ba9,A9D670ADCE41,"Finally for this conclusion I will just voice my own opinon about the short story on ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the thing I liked about the story is that it wasn't that hard to break everything down in to a little essay but besides that it was good and very informational story. I loved it!   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c0cba5720791,AA01A40D15DA,Have you ever been on an amazing trip? Have you ever seen many amazing sites? Have you ever been on a long boat trip? Do you want to help people? Do you want to care for animals? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+3cec5f3aee64,AA01A40D15DA,"If the answer is no to the first three questions and yes to the two other questions, then the Seagoing Cowboys program is for you. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a2d2a7f81578,AA01A40D15DA,It is fun and educational for any one at any age ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bed151ed1230,AA01A40D15DA,It is an amazing chance to get into this program and visit the unique places on the way to the adventure. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1b6f1055134a,AA01A40D15DA,This is an amazing adventure I have been on it I have seen so many places and met many amazing people on the way. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b95e58c3573a,AA01A40D15DA,"While I was in the Seagoing Cowboys program I made nine trips it was the most of any Seagoing Cowboy it was great. I saw so many amazing places I thought I would never be able to see because I was just a normal person in my town. I saw Europe and China while I was in the program it was a great experience for me as a almost adult. I also had the advantage of taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy, it was the city with the streets of water. I also had a awesome chance at touring the excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China in the Seagoing trip. You should join it so you can see all those amazing places I just stated to you that I have seen because of this amazing experience in the Seagoing Cowboys. Another reason you should join it is because if you are almost 18 and you do not want to get military drafted then join this, they count it as your service or they did for me which means they will for you. Another one is after the animals get dropped off and we are going back with no animals we get to play amazing games in the stalls that the animals were in like baseball and volleyball, we also played table-tennis tournaments or even boxing.
+
+These are all the amazing things i got to do and see, you could see and do them to if you join Seagoing Cowboys. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c67230b2e6a,AA01A40D15DA,"Did you love the idea of these things? Do you want to be apart of these things? Do you wanna be a Seagoing Cowboy? These are only some of the amazing things I got to see and do while I was in the Seagoing Cowboys program. You could do them to you just have to join in on it. Sign up and be apart of it, it is amazing and so much fun for everyone. It could be a great experience for you just like it was for me. So join and be apart of the group or program of the Seagoing Cowboys. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a47de36278ce,AA0660FA9196,"Now we have so many school was used the computer ''teacher'' to teach the students. It was pretty cool to see, now in the world we already have this kind new technology. But is we can make sure the computer ''teacher'' they can same with humen teacher, or even they can better than human teacher? Is the computer can like the human to read students' emotional? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9c568956d9d5,AA0660FA9196,"I think the answer will be: yes, the computer they can read students' emotional. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+090f5e9204a6,AA0660FA9196,"People usully have six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. So for this six basic emotions, people awasy can look the others face to read they are emotion. But is the we can make sure we read was all right? People make the emotions was used face muscles made. Yes, if a person don't want show they realy emotion to peolpe, they can make a emotions by theyslve. So when they do that, is we can still just look they're face to read they are realy emotion? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fde9d76e31e,AA0660FA9196,"That will be very hard, and was very eazy to read wrong emotion. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d8787978f45,AA0660FA9196,"People was eazy to read wrong emotional, so what about the new technology the ''Facial Action Coding System''. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd51fc5c1ebc,AA0660FA9196,"The Facial Action Coding System can help the computers teacher to identify human emotions. They have all 44 major muscles in the computer 3-D model, and when they move the muscles was like human muscles. So they are can just like human to read human emotional. And maybe they will better than human. They read the emotional like doing the math homework. They will check all you muscles to read you emotional, even you try to make a not really emotional. Because the face muscles was do not lie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fa5edd64b04,AA0660FA9196,"So the computer teacher, will better than human teacher to read the students' emotions. They can find out students emotions and do right things to help the students. The new technology the Facial Action Coding System was very useful and they can more help the teacher find out students emotions.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+42da31132fff,AA0B42CF00A6,FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is it a good thing or a bad thing? It could help people find there problem or could it not ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+503e589b9b25,AA0B42CF00A6,I find FACS a good thing a postive ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5525a715110b,AA0B42CF00A6,This ivention could help people and doctors find issues. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+60174fbf2b7d,AA0B42CF00A6,It could help people and doctors fix issues ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4aa1cebe7461,AA0B42CF00A6,this ivention could help schools when a student is becoming confused or bored or kids that don´t like to talk open up about how they feel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c072b9f0d50b,AA0B42CF00A6,"When a friend, family member or co worker is having a bad day we could use FACS to fix they´er bad day ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+587d9a8cab24,AA0B42CF00A6,It could help out in law inforcement ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+921c1538af58,AA0B42CF00A6,this invention could fix so many problems that we have today. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cf0c271a303,AA0B42CF00A6,"FACS is a wonderful thing look when phones and computers where being ivented people douted and said its a terrible idea or it will never work, Now its one of the best iventions thats ever been created. FACS is and will be a great thing to many people, school and companys it could save lifes ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b8f0a002ae62,AA23423F78A8,"In the passage ""The Challenge Of Exploring Venus"" the author supports the idea of exploring venus despite the dangers there can be. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+95210144e0c0,AA23423F78A8,The author describes exploring venus as having value. This means something that is worth alot important to find useful. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42ff8660ce98,AA23423F78A8,Venus can be another earth and maybe that way people can find many resources in venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f637934a5b2e,AA23423F78A8,"First, the author despite the dangers that venus can be the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then earth atmospheric pressure. Not one spaceship has survived the landing no more than a couple hours. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1090a777bf05,AA23423F78A8,Even though the dangers this can be the author still says theres alot of value in venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+85c56a3b5847,AA23423F78A8,"Scientist cannot take samples of rocks or stuff that venus has stuctures nothing do to the pressure and unsafety it is to land on the surface. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1afd5faabaa9,AA23423F78A8,"Next, the author says on paragraph 8 that ""our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangerd and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66ec5b61810e,AA23423F78A8,thsat no matter what dangers are they shouldnt matter should not stop from earth expanded and growing shouldnt stop them from exploring venus. The author want to know more about venus despite every kind of danger and its a challenging planet to study. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3060ba2907c1,AA23423F78A8,"Finally, after reading and discussing what the author suggests venus is worthy but therer are many dangers to exploring venus. dangers of landing,also dangers of the atomspheric pressure, the dangers of other creatures being there. Throught all of it the author will still agree that its valuable and shouldnt keep no one from studying it more. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1ee14d464ecb,AA45F6AB9AA9,"A extracurricular is something you do out of school or maybe it's for a team in school but is something to get you to socialize , meet new friends,being active ,finding something you actually love to do and keeping you entertained
+
+But for some people they do see it in that way and may feel like that is a way to get people out of there comfort zone ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+00d2f1913c95,AA45F6AB9AA9,That's why if my principal decided to make me do an extracurricular activity I would disagree ,Position,Effective,,,
+a8b1414e509e,AA45F6AB9AA9,some people are too busy and could cause stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6a681b55ee8,AA45F6AB9AA9,they don't want to do an activity at school or they already are doing an activity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+45eedf6e3657,AA45F6AB9AA9,they not a very social person ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c096290c036,AA45F6AB9AA9,One reason I would disagree is because some people are just way to busy and if principle makes them do an extracurricular activity that might cause stress to them and that could be adding more to their schedule which would be a struggle to maintain all of work I may have to do already especially as child . ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3e3acbefee63,AA45F6AB9AA9,"For example is someone has an activity out of school like dance on Monday and the principle makes them do another activity on that day it would be hard for them to stay after for that activity if she have another place to go already , and that's why that would be adding more to there schedule and would be hard to maintain another example is maybe I have a lot of school work I have to do or I have to study for a test and you don't have time to stay after for an activity that could also cause stress .Thats one reason why I disagree to making people do an extracurricular activity . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+74ada8dbe0c5,AA45F6AB9AA9,another reason I disagree is because some people aren't interested in what the school offers and if the principle makes them do something they don't want to do that would make them feel like they are forced to pick out of options they don't like . ,Claim,Effective,,,
+49764d44a702,AA45F6AB9AA9,"Say for example my school only offers basketball ,track and cheer leading ,but I really want to do soft ball that could be forcing me too do a sport I would not like to do . For another example say your school offers languages for and extracurricular activity like french and Spanish but he/she wanted to learn another language that would be be hard for me because maybe I only wanted learn language. That's another reason why I do disagree with making people do extracurricular activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bdedbb748a75,AA45F6AB9AA9,The last reason I disagree with making people do extracurricular activities is because maybe i'm he/she is not a very social person and they do not like to meet new people and they are very shy it could make people uncomfortable and nervous ,Claim,Effective,,,
+87d4e6ffd5f4,AA45F6AB9AA9,"For example he/she is made to join an activity and they feel left out because everyone else has friends and are talking too people they make them feel bad because they are not a social person. Another example is say that may not be a very athletic person and thy have to participate in a sport that could also make them feel like they are forced to do something they would not like to do and make them feel uncomfortable as well ,and thats why I disagree with making people do extracurricular activity ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2d3a4ca11d5d,AA45F6AB9AA9,"In conclusion that why if my principle made me do an extracurricular activity I would disagree because he/she might not want to anything in school or he/she are to busy or they not really social people ,and making people do extracurricular activity could cause stress, and more to there schedule and making people feel uncomfortable .That's why strongly disagree with making people do extracurricular activities  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+653f7b01c352,AA7A452C4D9F,lukes partipation in the seagoing cowboys program allowed him to experience adventures and visit unique places. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+128ab88c367f,AA7A452C4D9F,Ithink others should go join the seagoing cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2a9a138a5d83,AA7A452C4D9F,"The text states "" it was 1945 world war II was over in Europe,and many contries where left in ruins. The text also states that "" to help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cf821ef44a0,AA7A452C4D9F,Luckes claims helped me choose to convine people to join the seagoing cowboys program by you get to see all the historical places and get to see whats left in ruins. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf6d765607fa,AA7A452C4D9F,he also knew it is a chance of a lifetime that he'll never get again. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc9fce6a38e6,AA7A452C4D9F,"the details from the article that supports lukes claims are "" Helping out on his aunt katie's farm as a boy prepared luke for hard work. ""But not for the dangers at sea"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95e687fcae60,AA7A452C4D9F,People who think that they should not convince ohers to join is because they think that they would be away from their family's for a long period of time. And it's a lot of hard work. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c119c72f1ca7,AA7A452C4D9F,these people dont know the good it will do thecountry. And the people who really need help. they dont want to help out other people. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9ebd10d7f7e1,AA7A452C4D9F,i would convince people to join the seagoing cowboys program. I have stated that a its a once in a life time chance to have. Also they could help out other people by doing so. And you'll be aware about others people's needs despite your own. So i would convience others to join. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+adbffe9a3ebd,AAE4139C25E1,The use of cell phones and other handheld devices make daily life in the 21st century easier and more convenient than it has ever been ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a432d02e28c5,AAE4139C25E1,attachment to these devices can distract individuals from their surroundings causing a number of problems ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4644c46ff1b6,AAE4139C25E1,"Mainly, using a cell phone while operating a vehicle has a great potential to cause accidents. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f2482b36afa,AAE4139C25E1,Alternative hands free devices such as bluetooth headsets can keep a driver's eyes on the road while also being able to communicate as necessary. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c54eb68e7343,AAE4139C25E1,"If a driver is using their cell phone, it means that their visual focus has become divided and the potential for an accident is greatly increased. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bf83146e6955,AAE4139C25E1,"According to The United States Department of Transportation, cellphones are the cause of 1.6 million car crashes per year in the U.S. Driving a car requires a certain amount of focus, coordination, and reflexes in order to drive safely. Humans can only focus on so much at once, so unnecessary operation of a cellular device is highly advised against when doing something as potentially dangerous as driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d32055d2a600,AAE4139C25E1,Hands free accessories are the perfect alternative for people who absolutely need to be communicating while driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c8489edcce0,AAE4139C25E1,Headsets and bluetooth screens integrated in to some cars are relatively safe compared to blatant texting while driving ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42db1d0d84e5,AAE4139C25E1,While a study done by the University of Utah displays evidence that using these hands free devices can incapacitate a driver even more than alcohol ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a5533b801ab0,AAE4139C25E1,having a set of eyes on the road is still better than none at all. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+bab2bc0e8e25,AAE4139C25E1,"When driving, the best way to avoid an accident is to not communicate via a cellular device in any way. Laws against using cell phones when driving should remain in place and continue to be enforced. Not only do they put the driver in danger, they put everyone else on the road in danger as well.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+63028d297e60,AB02689C1A9B,"In Germany, residetns have given up on cars. Vauban's streets are completely ""car-free"", except the main throughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs, and a few streets on one edge are only two places to park.
+
+70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and the 57 percent sold a car to move there. Some say they feel happier now than before when they had a car. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. Greenhouse gas emissions are reduced drastically. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the U.S.
+
+In the new approach to make cities denser, and better for walking stores are being placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway. In teh U.S., the Enviornmental Protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities, and legistors are starting to act, if cautiously. In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other tansport.
+
+After days of near record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters, an international news agency headquartered in London; 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.
+
+President Obama's goal to curb the U.S.'s greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week. Recent astudies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+91288064425e,AB0403712FA9,"Have you ever played a sport for your school? Well as an experienced athlete I know it can be hard to balance the never ending piles of homework when you have to spend most of your time training. And it's not just sports that have that effect it's all extracurricular activities. When a student joins on of these activities they don't know what they are signing up for, because they are really just an extra load of stress onto the crippled backs of today's students. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+70872527f67e,AB0403712FA9,"Forcing students to participate in extracurricular activities is really just extra stress, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6027405cac55,AB0403712FA9,helping you get bad grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3829ff8fa17f,AB0403712FA9,all together effecting you negatively. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fc8cd1c16e1,AB0403712FA9,"Sports are probably the most important thing in many of students lives. Sports are getting them scholarships pushing them to get better grades, and become healthier people overall. But when a student joins a sports team he is taking precious time away from his day where he could be doing his homework, spending time with his family, or even babysitting his little sister so his mom dosen't have to pay extra money for a babysitter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fde61b8958e5,AB0403712FA9,"Stressed students get bad grades even when they're striving to get them up, stressed students make bad decisions, and stressed student are more grumpy, and snappy. All of these different emotions piled up causes students to try and find a different output, and that's where drugs, and alcohol come in, they strike when a student is weak. But thats not the only negative side effect of out of school activities because they really do destroy your grades ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0633b984af0f,AB0403712FA9,"Grades make or break people. Grades determine whether or not you get the job or you don't get the job, they give you life but they can also take it away. When a student get good grades joy floods into their life, their parents are proud, their teachers are proud, you auto-matically become glowing like a star. But when bad grades come along they contribute to stress, and usually your parents are not proud, neither are your teachers. Bad grades send students plummeting to rock bottom. Extracurricular activities are a leading cause in bad grades because they provide less time to study, do homework, sleep, and get the better grade. And when it comes to after school clubs they might not seem big but they are, they take away even more time and money because of all the competitions and contributions you have to make to those type of things. After school activities are a roller coaster that only goes up once in a blue moon. They effect you negatively, and it's not right to force them upon students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57d4a03ac5a8,AB0403712FA9,"Forcing student to participate in something that effects them negatively is wrong, and should never happen, ever. Being in the negative can be good sometimes though, for example when you have negative twenty-one fires burning your house ( No fires burning your house) or when your electricity bill is a negative (that means they owe you money). But in most cases being in the negative is NOT a good thing, like extracurricular activities. Negatives and after school activities don't mix because all that happens is more negative things. A negative plus a negative is not a positive, its more negatives. So in the end you have to understand that extracurricular activities are wrong, and not OK. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+028aa3dbfb0f,AB0403712FA9,"Finally, Forcing students to participate in after school activities bring stress into their lives, worsens their grades, and puts them really low on a negative scale. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c2030f51f508,AB0403712FA9,"Extracurricular activities are a bad idea for any dedicated student to participate in, yet here we are still getting sign ups every day. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+684e8844bd8a,AB199403D486,"Is Venus a worthy pursuit despite the danger, I say no ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d668b77f27bf,AB199403D486,because Venus is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 thimes greater than what we had to experience on planet Earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00cc451bc233,AB199403D486,"First the text states ¨ These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, such an enviorment wuld crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.¨(Paragraph 3) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1feb24c3b1f,AB199403D486,"The quote is saying is event though our planet can mealt things Venus can mealt is a lot faster than Earth can. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9c4f480dc7d5,AB199403D486,"Then the test also states ¨Venus has the hottest surface temperatures of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and freguent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.¨(Paragraph 3) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+63abe40a7c59,AB199403D486,"The test is saying even though Mercury is the closet planet to the sun Venus has the highest preasure and heat and Benusin geology and weather presents additional impendiments like valcanos, earthquakes, and freguent lighting so it? hard for scienetist to land rockests on Venus. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b4fcaa81e38e,AB199403D486,So when you asked me if Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers My anwser will still my no because there are still thing on Venus we don know about. And even though scientist are trying to take new egimpment up tho Venus it still going to be tough to still figure out what still up their in Venous.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9e7d9e0bf1d6,AB2D3DFD55CD,"There is no way to know how someone is feeling unless you are them.
+
+Many people pretend to be happy. If you have depression you are prone to act happy even if you are not happy. Happiness comes from love, yes many can tell when their friend is upset that´s because they are close to them and know how they act. But just because you think you know how someone feels doesn´t mean you really know.
+
+If you have a disease or some type of physical trait many don´t have then you may look different then others. Every human is different in many ways. No one on earth has the same face unless you are a twin but then but then it still doesn´t justify the fact whether or not some one is happy. If you have downs syndrom you look happy all the time but that doesn´t mean you are. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e1fb8db6b075,AB2D3DFD55CD,A computer can not tell your emotions because a computer does not have emotions ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+42ef55d84452,AB2D3DFD55CD,"just because your facial muscle structure is a certain way can not determin your mood. Many scientists say putting on a happy face can actually help your emotions grow and develop. If you always have a happy face on then you will usually always be happy, that is not true. The Mona Lisa is one of the worlds most nutorious pieces of art. The Mona Lisa is set apart from much art only because of one reason and that reason is the woman is smiling.
+
+pieces of art from the 16th century until the early 20th century did not have smiling. I am not sure why many did not smile maybe it was easier to paint humans withouts smiles. No one for sure knows if that woman was actually smiling except the girl and Da Vinci himself. The world always wants to improve and make changes and but the world is different we all face different struggle sand have different emotions you cannot put a label on a person´s emotions.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7ffbf01d369d,ABB7625615F2,"The ""Face On Mars"" is getting talked about a lot lately. Many people have different opinions about the face. If you aren't familiar with the ""face on mars"" then you're probably wondering why there is an argument going around. You're probably wondering this exact question: ""Why is there a big argument about ""The Face On Mars?"" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3559e1d3720d,ABB7625615F2,The folllowing details and information will be informing you exactly why scientists and theorists are having different opinions about the peculiar face. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b5c887268099,ABB7625615F2,Some scientists are saying that the face up on the moon was not created by aliens because of all the research they have done with and about it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aefb0e7fd58e,ABB7625615F2,"One example that tells you why it isnt an alien artifact is the shadows. The only way the messa (face on the moon) was able to have facial features was because of the shadows that was cascading down upon it. The shadows gave an illusion of eyes, a nose, and also a mouth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fb9bc068d6a,ABB7625615F2,"Another example, would be the pictures that the scientists have taken ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ada4b2e77360,ABB7625615F2,"The first picture that was taken was taken on a cloudy day. The picture was to blurry to be able to make out any details. In 1998, Michael Malin and his MOC team took another picture that was ten times sharper than the first. One of the cameras they had contributed greatly to the search, since that camera was so sharp they would have easily been able to find any markings from extraterrestrial beings. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46c8c3ca82be,ABB7625615F2,Also another detail helping the scientists was the weather. The weather took a massive part in this study. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95f4bfe8a4a8,ABB7625615F2,"Since it wasn't a clear day at all and there were ""wispy clouds"", like in paragragh eight, the MOC team could not get a clear picture. When the team comes back to take yet another picture it is a clear day and with that clear day they are able to pick out any details from the ""artifact"" if there are any to pick out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2be117052b5a,ABB7625615F2,"A final example, is how they compared the face to a formation on Earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e520fcf47c4,ABB7625615F2,"The scientists compared the face to the Snake River Plain of Idaho because of how similar they are. They are similar in a way because of the isolated messa, height, and landforms. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b36abb07d082,ABB7625615F2,Theorists are saying the exact oppsoite from the researchers. Here is an example fo why they thought it was a true artifact ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49f22d7ab315,ABB7625615F2,"A few scientists themselves thought that is wasn't just a landform but something more. Since the scientists believed many people instantly believed too. They didn't think about the research that was done, but they chose to believe the few scientists.
+
+An example that would support the idea of them believing, is that there were many movies made about the face. Many people believe everything they hear and what they see on T.V. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4416510b04e1,ABB7625615F2,"A final example is, how the skeptics thought it was created. ""If the aliens didn't create it then how did it form?"" That question was most likely going through their mind, trying to figure out if they should believe science and research or they should believe movies and others. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+df285e2324c0,ABB7625615F2,"
+Yes, i understand how skeptics actually believe that the face was made by aliens because they dont know how it was created. They don't know who created it either. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9fa373043fcc,ABB7625615F2,Scientists are proving that it was weather that created the formation and maybe even astroides. Theorists may also thinking that the haze prevented the scientists from seeing the alien's markings. If weather and haze prevented that then why didn't the scienists see the markings on the next photo that they took. That photo was even ten times shaprer. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8eebda0e90db,ABB7625615F2,The examples I have lsited help inform you why there is an argument going on about the face. Science clears and explains a lot more phenonmon than opinions and belifes do.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1d0175bdc752,ABC4770058F6,Almost all students love Summer vacation. But this time out of school is also a major halt in leaning. This halt can cause students to fall out of the rhythm of daily learning and cause them to forget material taught during the previous school year. This is why schools started implementing Summer projects to keep students engaged in learning. Summer projects have been traditionally designed by teachers but some people argue that students should be designing these projects. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+a2edc6d4ef5d,ABC4770058F6,Teachers should be designing the Summer projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ead869fbf49,ABC4770058F6,"they know more about the material, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b10e35ada208,ABC4770058F6,"they would make it challenging enough, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+68620a60de95,ABC4770058F6,"it would be an easy and simple process. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0eb1a1da3204,ABC4770058F6,One reason teachers should be designing the Summer projects is because they know more about the material. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a494e9b08462,ABC4770058F6,Many of these teachers have been teaching this information for a couple years. This means that these teachers have a good idea of what the students know from this school year and what information they should be prepared for in the coming school year. This information would greatly aid in making the Summer projects because the teachers would know how to format it in a way that students are familiar with but also prepares them for the new information that will be presented in the next school year. This would be very helpful to kids because it sets them up for success in the next year. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+773da146e3a5,ABC4770058F6,Another reason why teachers should be designing the Summer projects is because they would make it challenging enough. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ecb3ab5eba44,ABC4770058F6,"If kids tried to create a Summer project, it would most likely result in an easy assignment that would take no effort. This would destroy the entire purpose of the summer assignment and give no benefit to the student. But if teachers designed it, then it would more likely be a project of an acceptable rigor. The projects needs to be challenging enough that it keeps kids engaged in learning so they will benefit from it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96e11b6e439d,ABC4770058F6,The last reason teachers should be designing the Summer projects is because it would be a easy and simple process ,Claim,Effective,,,
+69d76d53f71f,ABC4770058F6,"If a couple teachers get together and make the Summer project it would be easy for them to make a rubric to go along with it. If the students make the Summer project then it would be much more of complicated .
+
+The students would most likely have to brainstorm ideas and pick one for the project which would take time, then pitch the idea to the teachers and wait for approval, and then after all that is done the teachers have to use a project that they did not make to create a rubric for grading. This seems like a lot of extra work when it could easily be simplified by the teachers creating the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb928b771409,ABC4770058F6,"Some people may argue that if the kids design the project they will be more engaged and willing to complete it, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b2b2662d097a,ABC4770058F6,but the pros of teachers creating the project definitely outweigh the cons. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+56f5ec73d5ee,ABC4770058F6,"Summer projects are extremely helpful and important to students learning experience. This is why it is so important that these projects are well constructed and thought out. Considering all this, it is clear that the best people to complete the task of creating these projects are teachers. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a76151d62950,ABCAF2A8A893,Have you ever through of somethig simple in life like studying venus. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+df8d84f65d74,ABCAF2A8A893,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because they are so many risks. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4697eb887a1d,ABCAF2A8A893,"Venus still has some features than the other planet on the earth and because most of people called it ""Evening star."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7272c8668689,ABCAF2A8A893,""" The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" because they are worthy pursuit some condition. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9a107a7a584a,ABCAF2A8A893,"They are price etc. we need to buy gas,sample of rock. The scientists seeking conduct a through mission to Venus would need personal despite to risks himself it is a danger place. They are such conditions are far more extreme than anything humans on the Earth. As we know that Venus has teh hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closet to our sun. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8f51ba42b7c8,ABCAF2A8A893,When we talk about planet it is about Education ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c6cc5b5bd574,ABCAF2A8A893,"An environment or our surrounding would crush even submarine accustomed to diving because some of them they are so deepest parts o the Ocean and it would be quality of life. Education it based on everything we study like etc. Earthquakes,Volcanoes ,Venus, Mars,. Numerours factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study , despite its proximity. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8ec27a58d2b0,ABCAF2A8A893,Indeed the article has something which is really important. I agree with the article but they are other thing he did say about planet. As we know they are geology and weather present and additional. They frequent lighting strikes happen when it is dangers to go anywhere.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d563228be4b5,ABF484B46756,"Imagine this: You are an adult looking back at your schooling experience. Were you in any clubs? If you were, chances are you have fond memories of that time. However, does that mean extracurricular activities should be required at school? Many people have strong opinions on the topic. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d9a69342e08f,ABF484B46756,Extracurricular activities should be required. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e68136c79e50,ABF484B46756,One reason why clubs should be required in school is that being in a club provides skills that are extremely helpful throughout life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5f8751418407,ABF484B46756,"According to Brian Scott, an expert on youth development at the University of Social Sciences, extracurricular activities in school are some of the best ways that the youth can prepare to enter the working world. Scott explains that this is true because after school activities give kids further experience with important skills such as communication and team work. Furthermore, a study conducted by the Department of Youth Development found that 87% of adults who participated in extracurricular activities in school thought that being in an extracurricular activity gave them skills that helped them later in life. One possible reason why extracurricular activities could have helped people after they have completed their schooling experience is that it gave them important skills and character traits such as perseverance or good communication. All things considered, extracurricular activities give those who participate quality life skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56b1c7d668d7,ABF484B46756,Another reason why after school activities should be required is that it gives the participants helpful experience. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6335c04bbac6,ABF484B46756,"Evidence for this is found by the University of Statistics who conducted a study that found that 76% of people who were a part of extracurricular activities during their school experience thought that the experience from those clubs is helpful to them in their careers. Some ways that clubs can help in careers is it can give students experience in their chosen career path. Examples of clubs that are best at providing experience specific to future careers is the math club where students can participate in competitions or the newspaper club where students can practice for journalism. The experience students gain from joining extracurricular activities in school can also be helpful when applying to colleges, if students choose to go down that route. According to the board of applications for the prestigious College of Law, one of the top things they look for in an application is what extracurricular activities the applicant participated in while in school. One member even said, ""I value extracurriculars even more than the grade point average when I am decided who gets in."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56204edd1110,ABF484B46756,Another reason why extracurricular activities can be beneficial to students is that it gives students an opportunity to make new friends with similar interests. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+744e62f5ec83,ABF484B46756,"The Department of Youth Statistics stated that one of the best ways for students to make friends is by letting students choose what activities to do and pairing those with similar interests together. That is exactly what clubs do. Furthermore, it is proven by the University of Psychology that when students have a healthy amount of friends, they are less likely to fail their classes and more likely to succeed. Based on that, extracurricular activities can cause students to be more successful than their peers who do not partake in those activities. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+050d5a13fa4c,ABF484B46756,"However, some people argue that students should be able to choose whether or not they want to participate in extracurricular activities in school. They cite people such as Jessica Grant, a professor from the West Virginia University of Psychological Studies, who said, ""when people have a choice in what they do, they tend to feel the benefits much more than those who are forced to do something."" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b0aede12bf9a,ABF484B46756,"While that might be true, students who are required to participate in at least one extracurricular do have a choice in what club or clubs they join. That choice is explained well by Dr. Matthew Brown, a professor of psychology at the University of Washington State who said, ""even when students are required to participate in something -- either a class or an activity -- they still always have some sort of choice, whether that is what activity to do or what mindset to have."" Using both sets of logic previously stated, when the students choose what club to participate in, they will experience the largest amount of positive results. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bed0fa43b320,ABF484B46756,"a requirement in schools should be extracurricular activities. Clubs give students important life skills and experiences, as well as new friends. If clubs are required, then young adults would be much more prepared to transition out of school and in to the working world. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7ea9c10b4b1c,AC1E6307E966,The article is about venuse that some time called be the Evening star. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a0f047d11ee8,AC1E6307E966,"Venus is actually a planet in the oue solar system. is on the brightest point of light in the night sky. It is the closest planet to the earth. and occasionally the closest in distance like Earth, Venus, and Mars, the other neighboer orbit the sun at different type of peeds mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and the other timer to the Venuse. We as a humans have sent numerous spacecraft to the land on cloud draped world. Venus reputation as a challenging planet for the human to be study by despite its proximity to us.
+
+`The 97 percent carbon diocide to a thck atmsphere of almost venuse. The planet surface temperatures average was over 800 degrees Fahrenteit. The atmospheric pressure 90 timer up graster the other planrt. venus has the most hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solae system. Venusian geology and the weather temperatures present additional impedimente-s like ower earthquakaker, they can kill people or make people sick. sacientists even discussing further to it surface, Astronomers are fascrinated ny the venus becanuse once have themost Eath like long ago. Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.
+
+NASA has one particulartarly compelling idea for swending human to study Venus as possible has the solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venuse thta wopuld allow scientists to the float above the fray. air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.
+
+Venus is from a ship orbiting that safely for above the planet can porvide only limited on the ground of condition because most form of the light cannot penetrate the dense.
+
+venus surface and have lasted fir three weeks such conditins. these devices were the first envisioned in the 1800s and plaed am important role in hte 1940 during world war ll.
+
+travelesls on Earth could be had but beyond should not be limeited the dangers thing that is happen should dould be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.              ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f7f231ab4835,AC38AA9C5E8B,"The"" ""Face"" may look like it's a human face but it's not. Anything can make anything look drastic or cool. But there is no way that it could be a human inside of Mars. It's way to sketchy for it to be like that. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+373c240af2bc,AC38AA9C5E8B,"So I'm gonna go ahead and tell you why I think this is why I don't think it is a human at all. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+f1637bb4506d,AC38AA9C5E8B,The face structure hasn't changed any of those pictures. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cbe7a5550624,AC38AA9C5E8B,"If it was human, in a couple of months or years (maybe), your body becomes rotton and turn into nun but bones. If it was human, then it would have body parts along side with it. There's no body parts near it except rocks and holes. Besides, the picture look like it was taking from a pretty far distance for the head is bigger then that boulder next to it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f7071f000e5f,AC38AA9C5E8B,"The fact that I know that it's not a face, notice how by years go by, the face starts looking like an sand temple ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+71fa64091a10,AC38AA9C5E8B,"The thing with it is that on the top of it, it looks like another face on it, like a rebuilded electronic robot. But, when 2001 came by, it started looking like an a map or a super hard shell. All of these things that were on Mars looks different by the years. Now, in 2016, I bet it looks like a guided map to wear it started to wear it landed at. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c13bdbd6eaf1,AC38AA9C5E8B,"There's no doubt that this is just some random structure because there were no oxygen, nor water, on mars, in 1976 ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ecac8709053,AC38AA9C5E8B,"It's pretty much impossible to live there unless, your from NASA. Then again, there still are rumors about alien's existing. So what if there was a alien who killed an human and left it there? If you notice now, the structure of the ""Face"", how it fades away, it starts looking like an cracked shell. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cac9dd4c451b,AC38AA9C5E8B,"I want to believe that there is life on Mars, but the thing is that Mars ""probably"" have alien's there. As no one has thought about it, alien's could be legit. Just because we see a face on Mars means one thing, but the fact that it's whole entire bottom half of it's neck-to-bottom part is gone. Just because it changed up doesn't mean,""Oh, it must have cleared up since it's been there for a while"". I doubt that because, no human being can walk on Mars with no protection on that can keep him/her alive. If your going to Mars, make sure you need a quite bit of protection. But, if you actually do see an alien, just run, because it's best staying alive instead of wind up dead in the middle of no were on Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ddbe0981db87,AC55C74991AC,there are great things being in the seegoing cowboys ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5992d9d3fbd1,AC55C74991AC,you to get to see different places as it is started in the text beside helping people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12ceed70b892,AC55C74991AC,"I had the side benifit of seeeing Europe and china. But seeing the Greece was specile. Another piece of evidence from the text stares. ""So was taking a Gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water."" But there are also some bad thing a seegoing cowboy.
+
+Luke also toured an excavated castle on the way to china. If you are apart of the seegoing cowboy you can meet new people and look at new things in the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dce9ef98790b,AC55C74991AC,"""Luke heart race as he shot feet first toward and opening on the side of the ship. Luke was happy to beon board, especially when he return trips after the animals had been unloaded. He was happy to be alive, but he coudn't work for a couple of days because of his cracked ribs. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ba3395ec405a,AC55C74991AC,",this essay was about what you can do if you would like to join the seegoing cowboys. Next, it was about what they do and who you will meet. Then, tells what Luke does when he was apart of the seegoing cowboys and what he did for a living. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+624dcf37773b,AC5F232F9F99,Some schools require summer projects to keep students learning over there summer break. Students should be allowed to design the project so they enjoy it more since the project takes place during summer break. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+46463cb2056e,AC5F232F9F99,These summer projects should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+17d1d519663d,AC5F232F9F99,students will be more interested in the project ,Claim,Effective,,,
+29a1f01107f6,AC5F232F9F99,"the grades will be higher, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+780b4be28239,AC5F232F9F99,"it will make life easier on teachers. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0c865f961340,AC5F232F9F99,If students are designing the project they must do over summer break then it will be on something interesting so they have more fun with it over summer. Student designed projects will be on a topic that interests them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6d083a8e3343,AC5F232F9F99,"Since the students have designed the project then they will enjoy more because they whatever topic it is on interesting. The interest on the project will also result in students handing in better work by the time summer comes to an end. Students will also enjoy working on this project a lot more if it is on something that interests them. Let's say student is working on the project and it is on a topic that is not interesting to them. That lack of interest on doing the project will result in worse grades and some students just not doing it. That is why students should get to design there own project over the summer, so the interest levels will be higher. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24e3c8e61350,AC5F232F9F99,Another great reason the students should get to design is that the overall grades on this project will be higher. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d49b666b9f0a,AC5F232F9F99,"It is very unlikely that students get a high grade on something that they didn't enjoy doing, which is why if students designed their own project then they will likely get a higher grade on it. For students working on something that is not enjoyable will result in a lack of effort and a worse grade. If the students got to pick there own project then they will enjoy working on it and will then get a better grade because they gave more effort. Coming up with their own project will also serve as extra motivation to get a good grade on the project. If students created there own project then they won't want to fail something that they made. That extra motivation to not fail something that they created will result in higher overall grades on the project. This another good reason as to why students should be allowed to create their own projects over the summer. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+be11f1ad8ee2,AC5F232F9F99,A third good reason as to why summer projects should be student made is that it will make life easier for the teachers ,Claim,Effective,,,
+067711baefce,AC5F232F9F99,"It is good for teachers if students make their own project because then teachers don't have to work late coming up with a project. If teachers are forced to work longer to come up with a project then it might not be that good. It won't be a good project because teachers will start to get tired which will result in errors on the project, which is why students should make their own project. students designing their own project will also give teachers extra time to do other things. while the students are coming up with ideas on what the project should be about teachers will have time to grade all the other work the students have. This will also remove the pressure off the teacher because instead of worrying about making a project they will be able to com up with better lesson plans and more fun stuff to do while school is still going on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+45c3e8934df9,AC5F232F9F99,"This is why students should get to make their own projects instead of teachers making it for them. These summer projects should be student designed because students will be more interested in the project, the grades will be higher, and it will make life easier on teachers. Those are just three reasons as to why students should get to make their own project for summer.               ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+145bc074a825,AC71A062B952,"Today, majority of humans own and operate cell phones on a daily basis. There is a new law called ""hands free"" where people that own a cell phone cannot operate it while driving. This has effected people that own motor vehicles in many ways. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ff049324efa3,AC71A062B952,People need their phones to direct their self's places or answer emergency texts or calls. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5d11c200f75c,AC71A062B952,"The new ""hands free"" law is a law where no one can hold their phone while driving. This has effected people with older cars and even newer cars to this day. As this law is in set, people have to connect their phone to Bluetooth to be able to talk on the phone. For example, if you're driving and someone calls, you have to have your phone connected to Bluetooth to be able to talk. In some cases this can be bad for the driver and other people driving on the road also. If your phone isn't connected to Bluetooth while you're driving, there can be a high risk of a crash when you're connecting your phone to Bluetooth. In some cases, there could also be an emergency call you have to answer, and people that don't have Bluetooth in their car can be effected by this law ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0606003ec7cb,AC71A062B952,"The ""hands free"" law shouldn't be a law. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a31644bd020a,AC71A062B952,"Although the government thinks the hands free law is going to help the risk of crashes, the hands free law could be much less safe than using your hands. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+00af0df6343c,AC71A062B952,"""Incredibly, they also spent less time watching the road, even when they were texting by voice."" Stated in the Text Free is No Safer to use while driving. The Texas A&M Transportation institute studied people driving a closed course under three conditions: while texting by hand, while texting by voice, and by not texting at all. It seems as if texting by voice should be safer than looking at your phone, but studies show that texting by voice and by looking at your phone, the reaction time is still the same. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f65ff4205d66,AC71A062B952,The hands free law can affect you in a positive or negative way. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4dca89b080d7,AC71A062B952,"Yes, talking on the phone while your driving is a dangerous distraction. ""Many studies have shown that the level of distraction has more to do with the intensity of the conversation"" Stated in the ""Total bans may be impractical"" debate. Studies show, an in depth conversation that requires a good deal of thought causes a higher level of distraction than a relatively short. The time and the length of the phone call is what is dangerous. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0842192aa49,AC71A062B952,"Even though the hands free law can help with the risk of car accidents and keep people off their phones while driving, studies have shown that wether your texting by voice or looking at your phone the risk of crashing is the same. The hands free law should not be in play.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+976567187a42,AC7C84C2A13E,"For students, summer break is a time where school is just a figment of their imagination. Once school is out and summer begins, students dispose of the material they have obtained during the year to make room for the amazing memories of the summer. Teachers and staff know that learning is not what is on a child's mind when school is out of session, so they create summer projects to ensure that their students are still gaining knowledge even when school is out ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b044eadd50da,AC7C84C2A13E,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+94c2616b418e,AC7C84C2A13E,they will base it off of necessary topics ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+033960aa5444,AC7C84C2A13E,"be able to decipher between strengths and weaknesses of students, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7672916282000000,AC7C84C2A13E,challenge the students beyond their comfort zone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac37a9d4fe02,AC7C84C2A13E,"Over the summer, teachers create the curriculum that will be used to educate their students throughout the oncoming school year. Therefore, they know exactly what the students need to learn in order to progress, so it would be logical for teachers to design the projects instead of the children ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ec180d971e94,AC7C84C2A13E,"The teacher will include necessary information and focus on topics that are vital to the education of their students. Schoolchildren are unaware of what the next school year may bring, so if they were to make the projects it would be centered around the wrong ideas and it would be useless and not beneficial to them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ba12481c4cb6,AC7C84C2A13E,"As previously stated, teachers will provide students with important information in order to prepare them for the next school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+646bbed368fd,AC7C84C2A13E,"When teachers construct these summer projects, they will include challenging material to test the student's knowledge on particular topics. When the children's work is complete and submitted, it allows the teacher to point out strengths and weaknesses of their students. Knowing what subjects students struggle with and also strive in enables the teacher to instruct on the level of the class. Changes can be made to the curriculum and material in order to cater to the needs of the students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b60fe21069ca,AC7C84C2A13E,"Some may say that if the projects were student-designed, it would push them to complete the work because they were allowed a say-so in what had to be done. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ff2a8d0c74de,AC7C84C2A13E,"Learning occurs when one gains knowledge on things they did not know beforehand, so if they work on topics they are fond of, no learning will take place. In addition, students may not want to expand upon what they already know and challenge themselves because it is summer break, their time to be free. They are likely to do the minimum in order to be done so it leaves available time for more road trips and vacations. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+338947f1943e,AC7C84C2A13E,"In conclusion, summer projects should be teacher-designed because they will include important topics, be able to see what students need assistance with, and challenge students beyond what they are comfortable with. Schoolchildren do not know the topics that will be lectured upon in the oncoming year, so they are not fully eligible to create work on things they need to learn about. Also, students are likely to do the bare minimum to allow them time to do other things besides schoolwork.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+26c3d68e8270,ACCEC5D34B36,"Back in the day they did'nt have technology. They telephone to call they friends and mother & father. They couldn't not even go outside to see they friends they mother where so hard on them. Some would let them go over there friend house to have fun. Some had to stay home and clean up cook dinner and watch there little sister and brother didn't get to go nowwhere what to ever. It was a time they had to be in the house a certain time before the street light come on. Now, Parent letting there kids do what ever they want now. Now, They have internet, phone now, facebook, snapchat & twitter. Agnry on social media over boy and want to fight peolpe no reason. A bullying peolpe cause they look better den other people. Peolpe killing there self cause peolpe bullying. It a lot peolpe killing there self in different city and state for being pick on. And kids have so much anger on there self. Some peolpe need make a progra for these kids that has anger problem and wanna hurt there self. Some kids don't have mother and father they have to foster care. Till somebody take them in till there hand to peolpe there parent. Some teenger will live with there boyfriend insted of there father and mother. That you will have happiness, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3956dd8f74ea,ACCEC5D34B36,"surprise,anger,disgust, fear, and sadness on your self. And then associated each with characteristic movement of the facial muscles in your body. Some peolpe bring you down you have to get back up and stay in a good ways. Some classroom computer - animated faces move expressive- for video games or video surgery. Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's - feet around your eyes. The expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spowhen a smiling politician or celebrity isn;t being truthful. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+207b0de34225,AD3FFB7CA387,"Cars are one of the most common things in most countries today. Not a day goes by where a person will not see a car drive by, it has become the main use of transportation and, for the most part, can be the easiest use of transportation. But, so many people have been getting cars lately, that some problems have been arising. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+641cabf858e9,AD3FFB7CA387,"the gas that cars release can be harmful to the environment, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+030c783a8ecf,AD3FFB7CA387,"cars overall have been making people much less active, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a31377b226ba,AD3FFB7CA387,we can easily use electric cars instead of cars that run on gasoline. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c08d00770223,AD3FFB7CA387,"""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city."" (Duffer 10). This states that the air has been getting so polluted that some cities have been temporarily banning the use of cars because of this issue. Earth has been getting too polluted and destroyed lately, to the point that some people have been trying to predict an ""end is nigh"" date due to all of these issues with earth. Scientists have been talking about global warming for years now, and the problems we have been having with the greenhouse effect and the ozone layer. ""President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in American behavior: recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by."" (Elisabeth Rosenthal 29). So it seems that the lower use of cars by Americans has been helping the atmosphere and postponing the date of the complete destruction of the ozone layer. That was why cars have such a big impact on the environment as a whole. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a9e3ae059141,AD3FFB7CA387,"One of the largest issues for parents in today's world is trying to get their children away from the computer, television, and cell phone. Technology has lessened the need for toys and books, since children entertain themselves with games on their tablets or books they download also on the tablet. But cars play a big part in this. When a person first gets a car, he/she feels free. You feel like the world is yours because you can go anywhere. But the problem is that people become less social with cars. Instead of going to play a sport with some friends, most people would rather drive somewhere else. It is also the reason the United States is ranked second in country with the most overweight people, vehicles are so unexpensive here that anyone is able to purchase a car and drive to their destination instead of riding a bicycle or skateboard and getting some real exercise. ""Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks"" (Selsky 28). This also shows the improvement on the cities' sidewalks and the increase of people attending parks. Without cars, the streets look better and people recieve more exercise. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+96e919fb461c,AD3FFB7CA387,"Electric cars are a new invention, and for the past decade they have been atempting at perfecting an electric car. The brand,
+
+Tesla , has already released a few electric cars that seem to work quite well. The vehicles make no noise when driving, and they even have a new ""sportsy"" look to them, for th young adults that want a nice looking car. But the only problem is the battery. Electric cars are being banned in some states due to the lack of reliability with these batteries. They have not yet been perfected, and can cause accidents. But even with the risk one would be taking while driving one of these cars on the streets, it is still a fantastic replacement for normal cars, since it does not release anything that can harm the environment. So the best solution would be to wait a few years until the batteries get better and the prices drop, then purchase an electric car, but still know when to stop using it and ride the bicycle instead. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87553c00dbf3,AD3FFB7CA387,"Combining the use of a battery rather than gasoline, and not overusing the car, you will have the perfect combination, which is what everybody should strive to accomplish. Help the environment, and get the right amount of exercise. ",Position,Effective,,,
+8fbc79c18154,AD3FFB7CA387,"In the end, cars are still one of the most common and one of the greatest things on Earth today. Getting a first car is a dream come true, but too much of it can be harmful. So get some use out of the bicycle, avoid poisoning the atmosphere, and cars will be a vehicle with no reprocautions at all, and it will be the perfect source for transportation, while keeping your morals where they should be. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0bad85a4af22,ADAE8A21CE9E,people should not waste there oney on something like that because by would peole need to know the emotions of students students are either happy neutral or sad ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c816f005d1b3,ADAE8A21CE9E,at least thtats my opinion but really something like that just seems like a huge waste of money we dont come to school to talk about our emotionsn we come to school because we need to learn and make new friendsand thats why i think a device that can read emotions is a huge wasste of money. plus it sounds pretty worthless if you ask me if you wanna know if someone is sad or not just ask us and we should answer its that simple theres no need to build something that complicated when you can just ask them youself theres really no need for something thats that complicated also what about mona lesa smileing thay said they needed that to discover if were smiling good to i think we can tell if someone is smiling and if someones isnt so yeah ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6ff6393814d8,ADBB29D9E179,"Luke Bomberger was join to the program because his friend invine to go to Europe on cattle boat Luke could not say no because they are best friend and if he say no his friend would be sad. So he was joinn to cowboy. In 1945 there was a would war 2 in Europe and manu countires were left in ruind. To help theis countries to bring them food,supplies,horse,cow, chicken and mules to help to survine.
+
+Luke clains is that he go on the boat and left it took them to past the pacific ocen.
+
+The body is that Luke made it to china so they play game and have fun and they go the mules and cow they was happy and in china they got food for them and there family is very happy and some people does have a home and they build home for them and some people got hert and they lost there family and they are realy sad and they are thankful that they are alive and Luke filled bad for them because they don't any home then Luke went back to his home and he was happpy. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d6922631c41,AE0BBF382263,Is Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+192b97074899,AE0BBF382263,"Venus poses several dangerous obsticles to pursuit because of how dangerous the planet actually is, which makes the time of pursuing the planet not reasonable and not worth the time for scientist ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dc14f8381f18,AE0BBF382263,"The author says, ""studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a53c39f2bb65,AE0BBF382263,"It is hard already to study Venus because of its atmoshere, which is made up of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide, makes the planet Venus the hottest planet in our solar system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9924c9fa9cfa,AE0BBF382263,Which creates big problems for spacecrafts to land on the surface of the planet because of the intense heat that Venus produces. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08948d1e3460,AE0BBF382263,"In paragraph 2, the author says, ""Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this isse explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more that three decades."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3316a654a378,AE0BBF382263,The author gives good reason to why trying to land a spacecraft is not the best option to obsevre the planet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d53df79da5d5,AE0BBF382263,"Instead, focus on another planet that is well worth the time and money of a spacecraft. It would only take moments for the spacecrafts to be liquefied after standing on Venus's surface. Spending more time on a different planet that has an atmosphere and geological features similar to earth would be ground breaking for science and especially NASA. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c19e56378236,AE0BBF382263,"In paragraph 3, the explains, ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenges are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6e314346452,AE0BBF382263,Venus is too hot for us to explore. Landing a spacecraft would only last moments because of how severe the weather is on Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b251c66f810a,AE0BBF382263,"An environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquify many metals. Also, Venus's geological landscape and weather like erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3e0ce18183c,AE0BBF382263,"In paragraph 6, the author states, ""Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+758496754233,AE0BBF382263,"Since entering Venus's atomsphere is deadly, even hovering over the planet is not enough for finding more information and observations about the hot planet. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0974c1bd87d,AE0BBF382263,"Hovering will only give scientist limited details about the planet. Also, having no light shining out of the planet makes it difficult for scientist to observe the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8756b108f947,AE0BBF382263,"Not being able to observe every characteristics of Venus would not make it well worth the mission to study more about Venus. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cfc3ae4a4a1,AE0BBF382263,"Pursuing Venus is not well worth the time and money for NASA or any other scientist, which does not make it reasonable for scientist to study and want to go more in depth about the hot planet Venus. Venus poses several dangerous obsticles to pursuit because of how dangerous the planet actually is. Overall, Venus is just too dangerous for people to explore, its not convienent for astronomers and NSA. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+120eb7ef0397,AE37AE3F79C7,"After the school year ends, students return to their homes feeling a great sense of relief that the school year is over, and that they're about to get a much needed break. However, just because school has stopped doesn't mean that learning should. Three entire months off is long time, and many students actually forget most of what they learned over the past year and need to be refreshed when they return to school. It would save everyone a lot of time if students came back to school with the last year's information still fresh in their minds. The simple solution to this problem is summer assignments. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d2375fa1a9d8,AE37AE3F79C7,"it is critically important that these summer assignments are student-designed, meaning that most of what is done for the assignment is thought of by the student rather than simply following the guidelines of their teacher ",Position,Effective,,,
+bf5d726062ea,AE37AE3F79C7,it encourages and teaches self motivated learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94ca07be5914,AE37AE3F79C7,will be something the student is more passionate about ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+becf2752be04,AE37AE3F79C7,will be less stress on teachers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2e4f2a81f80,AE37AE3F79C7,"Self-motivated learning is when the student has a desire to learn and therefore works hard to learn information without having to be pushed by their teachers. The truth is that while teachers can relay all the necessary information to students, if the students don't want anything to do with it they will learn far less effectively than students who do want to learn. By asking students to create their own summer assignment, it forces them into a new learning environment in which they have to take charge of their learning. Upon being put into this position, students will have to adapt to learn how to teach themselves information. This is a very valuble life skill that will be very helpful to them later in their lives, as self-education is needed for many things that are not taught in school as well as in the workplace. Motivating themselves is an important skill that can be taught through student-designed summer work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aaf295da4ee5,AE37AE3F79C7,giving students the ability to choose between what they have to do for their summer projects enables them to make the topic or submission format something that they are more passionate about than what they might otherwise be taught in school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+94438ca97d04,AE37AE3F79C7,"Typically, in a learning context, more passion or excitement transfers to more success at whatever it is the students are trying to learn. Being more passionate about something causes people to interact with it much more, and interaction is key to the learning of many students. In addition, students being excited to do something furthers the self-motivation mentioned above. If there is something that a student wants to do, they will do it without needing a teacher to tell them to. Overall, the passion that comes from student-designed summer work makes it a much more fun and more effective experience for students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9ef34c0d8209,AE37AE3F79C7,"Teachers work very hard to plan, produce, and grade all of the students' schoolwork for the entire school year. They deserve to have a break! By letting students take charge of their summer work, it takes an extra burden off the shoulders of the people who dedicated their lives to educating America's youth for a meager government salary. With the extra time they have without having to plan and construct a summer assignment, teachers can do many things, such as get the jump on later assignments that they will have to make, enjoy some time with their friends and family, or just get some much needed sleep. This extra time for teachers is another fantastic reason why summer assignments should be student-designed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+45a7243c68a5,AE37AE3F79C7,"There is no doubt that summer assignments are a necessary part of learning, in order to continue to teach information and to help students remember information that they would otherwise forget. But these assignments should not be simple rubrics and reading notes, they should be something different. Something that is going to have a significant impact on everyone in the education system. Something that will build a strong new generation without overworking the old ones. Those who are students understand the value of enjoying and wanting to learn about a subject, those who are educators know how important it is to be able to motivate yourself to work, and those who are school teachers know that a little extra time and a little less stress goes a very long way. That is why summer assignments should be student designed rather than teacher-designed. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7f0b4f315f5b,AE587E8BC0D3,"Adavntages of limiting your car usage can actually be benifitical to you and your family, maybe even the earth you live on. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2991a8c3d2f1,AE587E8BC0D3,"Many say that they were tense when they owned a car, but once they got rid of it, they claimed to be more happy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa58639a7a62,AE587E8BC0D3,That last statement has to be coming from a liar because why would you ever be happy without a car? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a00a01252581,AE587E8BC0D3,"In April 2013 the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9% below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. Many sociologists belive it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment since transportation is the second largest source of americas emisions just behind power plants. programs are suggesting that people use other methods of tranportation. which is cool, i guess?  Different things are suggesting that we are converging and witnessing a long term cultural shift. Car pool apps, center of cities makes suburbs less appealing. im not even trying anymore with this essay,  people are connecting in other ways than meeting up. nobody is caring anymore about this essay. just typing. in columbia its the 3rd straight year that cars have been banned. blah blah blah. goals are to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. nobody cares, lets talk about something else. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7ca5019b46b3,AE587E8BC0D3,"Advantages about limiting car usage. Really? I dont care about german suburb life without cars and i dont ever intend to care about it. i am a proud owner of a car and i dont want to live a life without it. This prompt is so unrelatable, mainly because
+
+I OWN A CAR!
+
+Maybe if i didnt i would be able to undertand this a little more but this is so ridiculous that i have to sit here and take time away from my education to write about cars. Im not even into cars. i dont care that people decide not to use cars, good for them, but i do use a car on a daily basis. im so over all of this excessive testing. Cars are pretty and nicely air conditioned, and shiny. They get you where you need to be quickly and you can jam out while on the way there. I hate essays, they are obnixious and boring. this is all a huge waste of time and i wish i just stayed home like some of the other kids in this class so that i wouldnt have to take this. Cars can be a nice way of driving around in money bags and showing everyone that you can afford this unnessacarily large vehicle that will sit in the hot room connected to your house, that also has a tempature very similar to hell. Honestlty your probably a really nice person who got stuck with the unfortunate job of reading all of these essays and grading them. You should be paid more because this just sucks, and im not even the one who has to read them all. You need to quit and go find some passion in your life. Take a painting class, or go watch the sunrise, you shouldnt be here reading all of these dumb essays that will never benefit my future or yours. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef5e254946c4,AE587E8BC0D3,"please go find a passion because you cant keep doing this and wasting your life away. Go water some plants, and make your bed, or make another persons bed. Just do somethign else other that sit here and read a bunch of essays that a essentially meaning less. You need something more in life and i do as well ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5754252c4f1c,AE6BABB53D5E,"Imagine you are an already busy highschooler focusing on maintaining your grades and your social life. All of the sudden, your principal decides that each student must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. Despite having a lot on your plate, you are now required to alter your weekly schedule in order to comply. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6af40cea2c0d,AE6BABB53D5E,Forcing students to participate in an extracurricular activity is unethical and promotes involuntary participation to students who are already busy managing grades and a social life ,Position,Effective,,,
+e08e8649feb4,AE6BABB53D5E,School is difficult as it is. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a40ca97a098,AE6BABB53D5E,"Students are constantly under pressure from family and peers to maintain perfect scores and attain high grades among their countless classes. Despite time given in school to get work done, many find themselves pouring countless hours over a desk at night, losing sleep for a 4.0 GPA. Students are given numerous assignments from each of their classes. Finishing these projects is difficult enough, and getting an A+ on all of them is even harder. Afterschool is already busy for students who focus on academics, and making them add an extracurricular will possibly lower their grades and motivation for school and grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d928a44d7e25,AE6BABB53D5E,"In addition to academics, many students seek to uphold a social life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83823a1b28f1,AE6BABB53D5E,"Hanging out with friends, going out for a coffee, or watching a movie are among the minor things that relieve stress from the life of an average teenager. School can undoubtedly be physically and mentally draining. Therefore, spending a couple hours per week socializing and hanging with friends can help a student immensely. However, these minuscule ways of staying happy can all be taken away when a student is required to make time for an extracurricular activity ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a892fd079f5b,AE6BABB53D5E,"Lastly, forcing a teenager give up valuable time and effort into an unwanted extracurricular is simply unethical and immoral. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4c622e33bc2d,AE6BABB53D5E,"Students should be allowed to explore their interests on their own, as opposed to being forced to participate in something they barely have any connection with. The best way for a student to succeed is to build upon something they already have skills or an interest in, and the activities that the school promote do not cater to each individual student. This new rule promotes involuntary participation and will possibly make teenagers resilient to exploring their interests and values. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+add655a9288c,AE6BABB53D5E,"Forcing students to participate in an extracurricular activity is unethical and promotes involuntary participation to students who are already busy managing grades and a social life. Highschoolers, and even middle-schoolers, are constantly under pressure to pursue high academic scores while putting aside time for socialization. This new rule is immoral and does not value student's time or schedule. The school should spread awareness about after school activities so that teenagers can reach out on their own, rather than bluntly making them join an activity they don't have time for or interest for. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4cb23113f11b,AE6E407DC359,One why in the world would you want to know soemones mood you dont know what they were going threw thats history hwat they were feeling let the past stay in the passed ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4959dbf67f98,AE6E407DC359,not alot of people wanna know why she was sad this isnt from the artlicle nobody cares about why she was sad or happy leave her be what kind of test is this who the heck is gunna ask you what the heck happened in the passed its the passed it should stay there nobody in the world is gunna ask you what mood was mona lisa in in the picture who the heck cares its in the passed i didnt have to go into the artlicle to know this is stupid make fun of me if you please if someones reading this sure if its the computer when what the heck computer slide me a dub on this test me and you both know this isnt something will be asked in the future honestly tho who cares this is nonsense whos to really know if u were happy or sad or the picture was actually there to make u smile thats like me saying im here to be loyal then say im gunna cheat instead. you were not there to say that it was there for that one certin purpose no personal information but me and my girl arent together so that isnt my girl so i could lie and say she cheated or i can tell the truth n say she left cus i wasnt making her happy ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4df1f0951838,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Can you tell the air feels different? Over the past years some countries have put restirctions on car usage. Although this may sound extremely crazy to some, most individuals accept the new law's for car's. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ea9edb642502,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Motorized vehicles have put a tole on our environment, our well being, and our wallets. ",Position,Effective,,,
+fbe2b1c3d384,AF3D63DA7CB4,it has allowed individuals stress level to decrease ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bd4049492566,AF3D63DA7CB4,"lowered air pollution, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+062ce0256a0a,AF3D63DA7CB4,increase money that citizens have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc0816a1f887,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Cars are one of the main sources for people's stress, whether it be because of car failures, others who annoy you while you drive, or the fact you can never find a parking spot.  Heidrun Walter claims "" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much mappier this way ( In German suburb, Life goes on without Cars 3)."" One main reason people are less tense and stress is because people do not have to constantly worry about if another car is about to hit them, if traffic is going to be to slow to get to work, or if your car is going to breakdown on you. Car's create unwanted stress that can be easily avoided. Indeed life would be very different without cars people in Bogota, Paris, and Germany have all been able to function properly without motorized vehicles.  In fact ""70 percdent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold cars to move her (In German Suburbs, Life goes on without Cars 3)."" These individuals have proven that it is okay to make a switch. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c1ce0621c60a,AF3D63DA7CB4,"In order for you to reduce stress in your life, you have to take away the source of stress, and that is what citizens have done, and without cars majority of people are happier and healthier. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+90bf1d6c734e,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Due to citizen's of Bogota, Paris, and Germany not using cars and having to switch to bikes, walking, and electric bikes; has greatly reduced toxic gases in the environment. Due to individulas in Paris not excessively using cars the amount of smog has reduced. According to Robert Duffer "" after days of near-record pollutions, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city( Paris bans driving due to smog 10)."" Paris has enforced strict rules that rejects people from driving, also a switch to diesel fuels. In return these ideas have lowered the level of smog in Paris creating a cleaner environment for the citizen. Not only has Paris help reduce toxic gases from entering our environment, but so has Bogota. In the article Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, Andrew Selsky stated that this has been Bogota's ""thrid year straight that cars have been banned for one day"" and the only motorized vehicles they have used are ""buses"". This switched has dramatically cut traffic, rush hour, and the amount of smog left in the air. Although there is still traces of pollution after this day it has lowered. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d90fa9795441,AF3D63DA7CB4,"The reasons are simple, using less cars makes less gases, also those who go the day without using cars may like the change better and permantely switch to a lifestyle without cars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c2cfceceafed,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Another thing that has been changed due to the limitation of car usages is that with individuals not having to buy a car, pay for insurance, and pay for gas, it  has increased the amount of money citizens have in their wallets. Citizens of the United States of America have not exactly chosen to not use cars, but some have, the main reason Citizen of America have limited themself is due to a lack of money. During our ""recession"" Americans were ""unemployed"" and ""unable to pay (The end of car culture 32)."" Because citizens were not able to pay for cars, they did not use them, thus as you get adapted to a new situation you tend to stay with it. After the switch citizens who chose to continue a life without a car, were able to have more money because they didnt have to pay for the cost that come with a car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0cb577539f4c,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Now some citizens have made the switch to not using motorized vehicles, which has helped increase the amount of money citizens have, which is always an advantage because you are able to pay for other things that are neccasary to your life. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+db05d0e4d894,AF3D63DA7CB4,"Although cars seem like a material object that is so precious to life, it's not. In all reality people can live a life without cars, citizens in Bogota, Paris, and Germany have, and they enjoy it. Its time to make a switch and make a helpful change in your lifestyle. A life without cars is very benefitial, it is less stressful, lowers pollution, and has an increases of money. Although not using cars is a bit extreme, you can always make a better switch to using electric products, which can also help lower the amount of toxic gases in the air. Gas car's that produce extreme levels of gases are a thing of the past, I believe its time to move to the future.            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c9d3f62c6a12,AF4796CA4BC0,"it was 1995, world war ll was over in europe, and many countries were left in ruiens to help these countries you woiuld need to send many,many us army troops out to save them from all of that stuff ,like rocks that might have fallen on them and other stuff that might have harm them or others in there country ,luke was 18 before arriving in greece with means he could dafted for the military services when my draft board learned that i was. on cattel boat trip they told me just keep doing what i was, doing for my service the cattel boat trips were amazing for a small town boy like luke , he could learn. new things it was almost like he was a tourest when luke was helping out katie that was his aunt she owned a farm as a boy luke was hard working and brave but the sea's were , to dangerous for luke he could not handle it the first couple of days luke was happy with his job but as it got harded luke got more sad and unhappy with his job but being sea going cowboys was too much fun there was much mor to it thsn just having fun .                          ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a3934123aa4,AF637B7047FB,My principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a0d8a71349a1,AF637B7047FB,In my opinion this is a great idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e3be4a8f37fd,AF637B7047FB,"This requirement will hopefully increase the amount of learning opportunities, through educational extracurricular activities. Exercise, through physical or sport related extracurricular activities. Or even this one extracurricular activity will improve a students social skills, through team building or just working with other people on something in hopes that they make new friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a31d71e5c1e7,AF637B7047FB,it can provide extra learning opportunitie ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5fc137c09ea3,AF637B7047FB,increase physical fitness ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+268cbf7a0559,AF637B7047FB,improve student social skills ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6e3adb25d1f5,AF637B7047FB,"One way that doing an extracurricular activity will provide more learning opportunities is where you have school sponsored, after school activities made to help you in school or in specific subjects. One example of an extracurricular activity is the ""Homework club"". The ""Homework club"" is an after school extracurricular activity created to help you with subjects you are struggling in, assignments you dont quite understand, or school work that you are unable to do at home. This educational club comes with free tutors and teachers that will hopefully be able to answer any question you have and help you with any assignments you need assistance on. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b87ca2457df0,AF637B7047FB,"One example of a extracurricular activity based around physical activity is ""Weight room"". ""Weight room"" is an after school extracurricular activity based around physical movement and fitness. This club meets up after school to use the Robinson weight room. The weight room is a smaller gym based around work out equipment. Some of this equipment includes ,stationary bikes, stair climbers, rowing machines, basic weights, bars, and dumbbells ranging in weight. The people in this extracurricular club prosper to increase their physical fitness and become healthier. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7bcf1a9fdac0,AF637B7047FB,"There are numourus extracurricular clubs that dont base around education and fitness and these clubs, I would say improve a students social skills. One example of this is the after school tech theater club. This club comes together for about a month to help with the technical side of a Rambunctious theater show. In this club you get to meet new people and are able to help out your department. There are many departments in this club ranging from sound technician to costume and makeup technician. To join this club you have to submit an application and select what department you would like to be in for the production. This department requires team work with your other technicians and I think that this club is a good way to make new friends and teach better social skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97c415565fd8,AF637B7047FB,"If the principal were to implement this requirement at my school it would be beneficial. These extracurricular activities would greatly improve it's student's, individually but it would also improve the entire school as a whole. Through these activities you will find a way to become more healthy and fit. You will have access to more learning opportunities and I believe that you will even find yourself making new friends through these clubs or sports you find yourself doing. If the requirement to do one extracurricular activity was implemented I would not oppose because I know that it can provide extra learning opportunities, increase physical fitness, and improve student social skills ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2c7a957fa536,AF66DEECF5A6,"Scientists have been studying Venus for generations, wondering what could possibly be on a planet so close to ours. Now that we don't have to wonder anymore, NASA will try to take it one step higher. They want to be as close to Venus' ground as possible, without dying. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6ee32d2a959a,AF66DEECF5A6,"Their plans are to use a blimp-like vehicle that will withstand the great amount of pressure and heat. It will fly thirty miles above the Venusian landscape, avoiding any ground conditions that would do them harm. It would still be 170 degrees F., but they would have an abundance of solar energy, and the radiation woud not exceed Earth levels. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d1dd0d7834aa,AF66DEECF5A6,"However, in order to learn all there is about Venus, you would have to go onto Venus. This is almost an impossible task though. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+84bd9db0fb8d,AF66DEECF5A6,"There are many dangers on Venus, including sulfuric acid rain and an atmosphere of nintey seven percent carbon dioxide. Hovering over it would be useless. In paragraph six, it states, ""... peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective."" This states that by hovering on top of the planet, they can't learn anyting they don't already know. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+92a940a83cf6,AF66DEECF5A6,My honest oppinion on this topic is that we should not be exploring Venus right now. We just don't have the right technology for it right now. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+23d4b5dda7d8,AF66DEECF5A6,"We need to wait however many years before we can officially explore our sister planet. Trying to figure out its secrets now would just be a waste of time, money, and possibly lives. We shouldn't risk a human being just because this planet used to be like ours millions of years ago. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5f8827a831d5,AFCE5307F69A,"The time off of school during summer break is always looked forward to by students and teachers, but it doesn't mean the school work stops. Summer projects are a way to ensure that students can continue to learn information over the break, but many students would not want to complete them. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bf7a10d85442,AFCE5307F69A,"Although teacher-designed projects would be beneficial for learning in more detail, summer projects should be student-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+8467968c2762,AFCE5307F69A,"it allows for the students to be more creative, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d19c6304a3d,AFCE5307F69A,"have more freedom, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e597d612baf0,AFCE5307F69A,be more engaged in their project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+396597acabee,AFCE5307F69A,"Student-designed projects allow for students to feel like the project is less of a requirement, and rather more of an enjoyable activity. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0b3584797b75,AFCE5307F69A,"When students design their own project, they let their minds flow freely. This allows for the creation of projects that the students actually are interested in, which helps them become more engaged about whatever the project was about. It is a common belief that teachers should design projects so they can get their students to learn exactly what they need to, and that a student-designed project is not sufficient enough because students will not learn what they need to. However, a project by students allows them to learn content even better because they are choosing what they want to create, not being assigned it, and this creation allows them to explore content in a way that a teacher can't provide. For example, if a student had to create an instrument for music class from scratch, they would be a lot more interested in that than just making a variation of a particular instrument again. The creativity in designing a project is what students need to learn content in a way that is interesting to them, which helps them learn better during a time period where they don't even want to be doing work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ba01cad7ce0,AFCE5307F69A,"When a student designs their own project, there are very few restrictions applied. This is good because the students can learn required content however they want to, and they will most often choose to learn it in a way that is effective for them, which a teacher can't always provide. There is the argument that teachers can just give students a variety of options to choose from with a project, and that that freedom in choice will help students learn in a way beneficial to them but unfortunately that just isn't the case. Many students never get to create a project that they actually want to make, and teachers often just repeat options over and over again that students are already familiar with. For example, what if a teacher just kept giving out the same current events question, and a student never got to answer the question they were actually interested in? The freedom in designing a project allows a student to actually want to learn content, since they choose a way to learn content that would be fun to them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+98de377cb129,AFCE5307F69A,"Many students who complete projects throughout their school careers are not engaged in their work, and are just focused on getting a project done by the deadline with all the requirements. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5bd856306b63,AFCE5307F69A,"Required summer projects by some schools would be most beneficial if they were student-designed, because it would allow for students to be more creative, feel more freedom, and be more engaged in the overall process of learning through a project. This is especially important for summer projects because many students in the summer do not want to do any school work, so a teacher assigning a student another forced project would not motivate them to complete it, while if the student got to design it themselves, they would be more interested and likely create a better project while learning more. Teachers do have the ability to design a project that students would enjoy, but the student-designed project truly allows for more learning by the students because it is more entertaining and an overall better experience. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+47ba21d3d6c6,AFCF10293B9A,I am going to argue for the value of having the Facial Action Coding System in the computers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f45085e4e66a,AFCF10293B9A,I think it would be great to have something like this. The process beings when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of your face. They would go through all 44 of your major face muscles because in order for them to work they must move like human muscles. Dr. Paul Eckman the creator of FACS has classified 6 very important emotions then mixed them together with each with facial muscles. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7f457ff71f5,AFCF10293B9A,Then for classrooms like to tell if the students is either bored or confused about what he or she is susposed to be doing like they said in the article. Dr. Huang also prdicted that if you are talking about how if you are happy/smiling they would pop-up an ad for you being happy but if you are sad/frowning they will pull up something totally different for the ad. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46717654589a,AFCF10293B9A,Nobodies computer can hadle the complex algortihms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile but they can come up with soemthing to decode different emotions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1e0d99ab767a,AFCF10293B9A,"This coding system is very smart and can tell if you are doing a fake smile of some sort. If you use a fake smile the system will tell if you are because when you are the mouth is streched sideways using the zygomatic major wih some different muscles. To an expert they said ""faces don't lie"" these muscle clues are often sometimes used to spot if a celebrity or a politician is being truthful. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e021dd62dc44,AFCF10293B9A,So I have came to conclusion that this facial action coding system works on any and everyone to tell their true emotions.                ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37b3b4c09748,AFD739EDDEA9,"The author describes ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" and how a new technology called the Facial Action Cording System enables compures to identify human emotions. Because the author is trying to tell us how the technology can make us feel differents emotions. In this article we can find too many differents emotions that the Mona Lise had. And how the techonology can do it too. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4b0a61a83a6d,AFD739EDDEA9,"For example my first evidence that i found in this article is when said that ""Mona Lise is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry"". So, is trying to tell us that to making Mona Lise smile can be a difficult way, because she had too many differents emotions at the same time,but nothing is impossible. But also the people trying to describe a new technology to identify humans emotion. The new technology is called FACS ( Facial Action Coding System). This is the new technolody that the author wanted to used to find the humans emotions, , and see which one of the two option that they had can be more easy or more faster to find the human emotions.
+
+My other example that also i found in this article is when said that ""according to the new computers softward can recogniza emotion. The softward is the least innovation from Prof. Thomas Haung, of the Backman institute for advanced science at the University Illions."" The author is trying to tell us to describes the new tecnology was little complicated because with he wanted to describe that technology to see if will be more easy to identify the emotions. Also in this article said that the process begings when the computer construct a 3D computer of the face, all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles. That why i think that describes that new techology wasn't eassy because the new technology need to identify all about human. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e04c1fc2c18f,AFD739EDDEA9,"In my conclution is about the computers and how Mona Lise demostration was really intended to bring a smiles to your face, while it show you just how the computers can do. If you smile when a Web ad appears to your screen , a similar somputer could regnize too. Like said Dr. Haunght he predicted that the computer could recognize when a students or another person is becoming confused or sad. And acording to the Facia Feeback theory emotion, moving ourfacaisl muscles can make us feel not only expresss motion, but also can even help us to feel like some differents emotions. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c51a33aef9fd,B0007528CB4A,"Venus is gonna take Earths stop?
+
+Is Venus worth the risk to explore? maybe so. Venus has so many things to offer, evening star, many out of the world features, and a thick atmophere. Doesn't mean we should kill ourselves trying, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f7124ec5e7fc,B0007528CB4A,I think venus is not worth the try. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cc544fede8eb,B0007528CB4A,"First and formost, the evening star, is the brightest point in the sky. Venus also makes it simple to stargazing. Venus is the second planet and the next closest plant next to earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c93d3e4fb099,B0007528CB4A,"Stargazing is all fun and games on earth, but if you go to venus you may burn. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+58829240bf6e,B0007528CB4A,"Also, Venus has a very thick atmophere. It's almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets around Venus. On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the pressure of the atomsphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+094a0739fa99,B0007528CB4A,"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on planet earth. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+2dcc26d0ff8d,B0007528CB4A,"Lastly, Venus's light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+197899dffb49,B0007528CB4A,"rendering standard forms of photography ineffective. Most importantly, reseachers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else in that matter. Many people are working on innovations thta would allow our machines to last longer to contribute to our knowledge. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88f562bd1661,B0007528CB4A,"Venus should be left alone, just as we would want to be. Venus is a harm to all man kind who try and rescach on Venus. If it was a safe idea to go up there would have already done it by now. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+227a7ba09fe3,B05A40461916,The challenge to explor Venus is becuse Venus is the second planet from the sun so it is to hot to go to do to how close the sun is to the planet. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+393d23ab09db,B05A40461916,If you go on the planet you will git to hot to fast and the space sute will malte off of you and if the space sut melt off you will die becuse thare is no oxigen in space the space sute is the onley thing that is keeping you alive. And so that is way we can. Got to Venus quiet yet it will haping in the fucher. In the fucher we mite find some stroger miterole to build better sute and bettre space ships becuse the space shipe we have now cant withsand the heat of Venus the ship wuid melt do to the heat of being so cloes to the sun. The plant venus is not sutibole to land on do to how hot it is the planit venus has 97 percent carbon dioxide covering Venus. Carbon dioxide is not good to brething in it will kill you if you breat to much in. Do to how deadley it is scpaeman have the space sute to keep the alive if thay did not have it thay wood die do to lacke of oxigun but the spacesut has oxigun in it to keep the ware alive. After the spaeman are dont in space thay go back to the spaestasin ware that have oxugine to brethin and that do what they need to do. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2befaa95a4ed,B07E96B9767C,"As a student, if I don't understand something in class, I will ask someone about it. Whether that is a teacher, a student, or a parent there is almost always someone who knows. If any one of these reliable sources does not know, I can most likely look it up on one of my devices that has the internet ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b463f7e6a8c0,B07E96B9767C,"If we were to introduce the new FACS technology, it may have unindended lasting impacts which could be detrimental to our society. ",Position,Effective,,,
+496dd45b3e73,B07E96B9767C,"It was mentioned in the passage on paragraph 6 that "" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modiy the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+abe0b50e88a9,B07E96B9767C,The first reason that it could be bad for our society as a whole is that it is not the computer's duty to explain how to do everything and to change to our will. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+08824144790e,B07E96B9767C,"While computers were made to help us, it cannot be our only source of information. On the other hand, teachers are st school for the sole purpose of helping you learn. It is their actual job to be there to help you learn things. While computers are a tool to help achieve this goal, there are other ways to learn about things and get them explained to you.
+
+When you are in highschool, many teachers and parents will say things to you along the lines of ""In the real world"" and "" Highschool is preparing you for the real world"". Later on in life, ""in the real world"", if you get bored at a job you cannot just change what you are doing. You have to continue on with it because it is your job. If we implemented this system now in schools, many kids and teens would get in their mindset that if they are bored or don't understand something, things will change for them. Kids should not rely on a computer to help them understand everything. There are teachers, classmates, parents, and other adults who can help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9bdec59cb144,B07E96B9767C,The second reason why this could be bad for our society is the accessibility. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+820af8415008,B07E96B9767C,"Not every school has computers and not every class uses them. If we were to implement this software, it could be giving an unfair advantage to the students who had acsess to it. There are still plenty of schools that may not have a computer in every classroom. Similarly, not all students and parents can afford this kind of technology. Because of how new and high-tech this software is it most likely will cost more money to be put into effect. This would cause the schools with more money to be able to get it while the schools with less funding and less money to be pushed aside and not get it. This causes the students at the schools that cannnot afford it to have a disadvantage. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9ae7e17bd352,B07E96B9767C,The third and final reason why this could be bad for our society as a whole is simply that people may become less sensitive to reading other peoples emotions. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e44825d5c0f1,B07E96B9767C,"Without needing to have face- to- face human interactions to see how people are feeling, it could result in a decline of being able to recognize emotions in facial expressions.
+
+I learned a few chords on the ukulele this summer. I could piece together a song or two. Now after a few months, I can't remember the first thing about playing those chords. This example shows that if you learn something then don't do it for an extended period of time, it will take a while to relearn how to do it. Although reading emotions is nothing like playing ukulele, the same holds true; if you learn something, and rely on something else to help you do it, it is going to be hard for you to re-learn how to do it again. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+35edda08d90d,B07E96B9767C,People also have a right to privacy and some people may not enjoy those particular rights being breached. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+58675e0cd58a,B07E96B9767C,"I am a person who does not let all of my emotions show. Other people may bottle these feelings up in hopes that nobody will see. If people want to keep in how they feel, they should be able to do that as it is what they want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36a340713317,B07E96B9767C,"Because it is not the computers duty to exlain everything to you, not everyone has accsess to this kind of software, and people may lose their sensitivity to the fine art of emotion reading, I am in opposition of implementing this FACS technology. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+50f5d6e0b23f,B07F2237C606,This technology is a good idea to all students in a classroom who is feeling different emotions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+61a5c581e1aa,B07F2237C606,"The technology is helpful because it can indicate on when a student is feeling, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca61659c5960,B07F2237C606,"for example sad and if the teacher see it they talk to the student and know why is the student feeling happy or sad, angry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20b7e8ee5c52,B07F2237C606,The Facial Action can also be helpful with computers if they know how if we are stuck on something in class like a lesson or or assignment its like what Dr. Huang says or his prediction ''A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.'' ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e35d6d048e9,B07F2237C606,"'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'' This means even on the computer can calculate his or her face them changing their motion or expression. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46d1f0a817db,B07F2237C606,"Also, computers can calculate how you change your muscles to indicate which emotion your feeling at that moment ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe554667cd8a,B07F2237C606,"like in the article it talks about how your muscles movements move, ''For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when your're surprised; your obricularis oris (around your mouth) tightens up your lips to show anger.'' This shows that with these movements of characters it can show what kind of emotion a student is feeling in a classroom. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7f83a0744a3,B07F2237C606,"Also, this technology isn't what probably students want in a classroom because ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+692f91b3ecdd,B07F2237C606,"some students probably dont want their faces to be be modify or sometimes some students dont have no emotions like in the article it says ''The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,'' observes Dr. Huang, ''even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression'' this means that the someone probably have little emotions or expression in their face. In classrooms students who are bored show it mostly with body language which makes the face change expressions if the lesson is boring ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7d07b64e423,B082F1A267EE,"We have all heard of extracurricular activities. Many kids do them. There are sports and clubs, a ton of different options. What about the kids who don't do any? What do they do? Should extracurricular activities be required? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5b03bd40d14a,B082F1A267EE,Extracurricular activities are a great option ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a5bf45d15516,B082F1A267EE,It gives you a chance to be apart of your school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76c904100642,B082F1A267EE,"It can be anything from being on your schools basketball team to playing in the chess club. It is a great opportunity to make new friends, to interact with people, and be involved. It makes you feel like you are needed. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74c1e9de60ac,B082F1A267EE,"In today's world, everyone is on their phones. The second you wake up you check your phone. It has just become part of our daily life, that is why it is so important to spend time off of a screen, to do something you have a passion for. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5549cfcecbdc,B082F1A267EE,"Extracurricular activities gives us a chance to go do something we love, to go outside, to build and create new things, to accomplish something you have been wanting to do. It is really good for out mental and physical health! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce063df35a24,B082F1A267EE,Most parents have job and spend most of their day working so they can support their family. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ff28be69725,B082F1A267EE,"When they get home they often have many things to do. They have to make dinner, clean up, and many other things. That is why extracurricular activities are a great option, they are provided by the school. Extracurricular activities are cost efficient and parents do not have to pick/drop of their kids. Most schools provide an after school bus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b91f2d835adf,B082F1A267EE,"Lastly, extracurricular activities are a great option. They help students feel involved with their school, help students mental and physical health, and help let families let their kids participate in an activity! All students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bc7924ed1bf0,B095598DEE04,"The Facial Action Coding System is an unnecesscary piece of equipment. The software that would be able to detect the emotions of an individual would have several negative affects on society. The reading of emotions is a useful tool when it is detected by someone's natural instinct, but it would not be helpful to only have an understanding on someone's emotions due to the results given on a screen. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+10698eabaa41,B095598DEE04,The Facial Action Coding System is not a valuable to students ,Position,Effective,,,
+644916923b8e,B095598DEE04,because it would decrease the rate at which students learn ,Claim,Effective,,,
+294513e3ce26,B095598DEE04,identifying someone's emotions will not change how they are feeling ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0abdf6ddb4b3,B095598DEE04,"and it would decrease their motivation for work in the future. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3285458fc471,B095598DEE04,The ability for this device to detect the emotions of a student while they are working would be detrimental to the health and responsibilty of the student. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+23093b088805,B095598DEE04,"The author states that the machines will ""recognize when the student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective intructor"" (D'Alto 6). This would be harmful to the students determination to learn. It would also cause several students to fall behind in their education. Every student experiences boredom in class, but the teacher is unable to change the lesson everytime to best fit one individual student because the other children will fall behind. Students are still capable of learning material when they are bored even if it is not as effectively as when they are interested. Students need to also learn how to work through their emotions to better their ability to improve. When these students get into the work field, they can not call in sick or slack off every time they experience a negative emotion. This device would be teaching children that they should only be productive if they are intrigued by their task. This would not be a proper lesson to teach growing individiuals. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4e2d75495da,B095598DEE04,"The technology is able to identfy a human's true emotions, but that will not alter the way that person feels. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+98e95bb635c3,B095598DEE04,"Humans can often acknowledge how they are feeling, but the acknowledgement itself does not allow them to feel better. As stated in the article, ""They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one"" (D'Alto 7). This line states that the lab partner will be able to tell a difference netween a genuine and meaningful smile from a harshly forced smile. There is a difference between the two because smiling will not make you happy although it is a happy gesture. The machine informing someone that they need to smile will not actually change the emotions of that person. Politicians and celebrities are major culprits of this action. They often smile as they are told to do, but they are not always genuine. They are typically hiding something from their spectators such as when they are not being truthful (D'Alto 8). Just because famous people smile when talking or looking at their audience does not change whether or not they are happy individuals. If humans themselves are unable to change their emotions when they can detect that something is wrong, then machines will be unable to do that also. Although it can give people a precise measurement of their emotions, it will not change how they feel. Therefore, investing in this system would be extremely useless and wasteful. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e1b22d11035a,B095598DEE04,The technology that recognizes emotions in order to change the student potential will decrease their motivation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3c2301b13c35,B095598DEE04,"The skill to be compable of working through tough situations is essential to posess. Modifying a students' workload would harm their motivation. These students will no longer be motivation to be their most effective because they will expect everything in life to be modified to their liking. Unfortunately, this is not a trait that can be successfully transferred to real world issues. Therefore, these students will be less prepared for potential problems they may encounter. This system would also decrease the dependence on human connection. The text states that computers need to understand emotional communications because ""most human connection is nonverbal"" (D'Alto 6). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f7f2766161de,B095598DEE04,"Although that statement is true, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+06b6be6edc39,B095598DEE04,there is little use for computers undertsanding how humans feel if they can not help the individual with their emotons. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7810a601452c,B095598DEE04,"This may cause people to reply more on the machines, which would lessen the amount of human connection that exists--much like previous technology advances have done. Human connection is essential to a striving population, therefore it will have negative affect on society. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+087b41f6cff2,B095598DEE04,"The Facial Action Coding Sytem would be wasteful to the society, and would cause several negative effects. It is not something worth investing in because it would harm the developing youth. Not only do these machines prove useless to emotions of people, but it will also decrease the motivation of students and future employees. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+22b593340886,B098FABF15D7,This face is not created by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+297cb1d171b3,B098FABF15D7,It is not created by aliens because there is no proof of humanans let alone aliens found on Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+253e1dffafcb,B098FABF15D7,"How would they survive and humans can not. In paragraph nine it discribes how hard it was to even get a picture of this face. If its very hard to get a good glimpse of this image. Its going to be struggle to live and be active on Mars as well. This has to be a natural landform that happens to looks like a face. If someone really did this, they would want credit and all the fame for all their hard work and i think we would have spotted them all ready. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c89611bc2043,B098FABF15D7,This landform just happened to be a poppin thing for us on Earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20fefc0d1cab,B098FABF15D7,There may have more then one landform that was very close. It so happened to make an image. Its very facinating how natural Earth funtionings can make something so exciting. If you have an imagaination its like the earth has its functions and feelings. Like the weather and natural things like landforms that form ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+425f235da7ab,B09E38E0E8EC,"Although limiting car usage may seem out of the ordinary, it has many benefits that appeal to people. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8d2aa2aaa945,B09E38E0E8EC,"people save money, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+138a71fd2a83,B09E38E0E8EC,the air isn't being poluted as much ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1a03f3f8afc1,B09E38E0E8EC,there aren't as many traffic jams. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+334180614fd4,B09E38E0E8EC,"For example, a German suburb, Freiburg, near French and Swiss borders allow the use of cars, but is somewhat strict. Rosenthal states, ""Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park-large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home."" Not only does it cost $40,000 just for that but gas and fix-ups go along with having a car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+647baedada45,B09E38E0E8EC,"For instance, Paris issued a driving ban in an effort to ""clear the air of the global city."" Duffer says, ""Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog..."" The smog that affects Paris is also known to ""rival"" with Bejing, China, one of the most polluted cities in the world. By banning car usage for a day, the air had a chance to breathe and is overall healthier for the people that live in that area. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b799fc3f77b7,B09E38E0E8EC,"To further explain, Bogota, Columbia has a program in which people do not use vehicles to get where they need to go. Andrew Selsky states, ""...millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day.. leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams."" It's a positive thing to have ""car-free day"" because less accidents mean less people getting injured. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7675fabfb4b2,B09E38E0E8EC,"limiting car usage is not only good for people, but it can be positive toward the earth and environment as well because it saves people money, the air is healthier and people have less of a chance of crashing. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+96f863f0b8df,B0A08E744DF1,"The use of technology suchas, Facial Action Coding system, is totally uneccessary in the classroom setting. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ceccec275ca9,B0A08E744DF1,"Claiming that "" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' "" is an ineffective way to to really, truly get through to the students. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8299a784af86,B0A08E744DF1,"Instead of focusing on adding more technology to the classroom, maybe giving teachers a better salary and better education would help the teachers teach better, then the students would understand the material better. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc5b200b1b4d,B0A08E744DF1,"In the article, it says "" we humans perform the same impressive 'calculation' every day"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b18ab394a08d,B0A08E744DF1,"If humans already have this natural ability, then adding more technology into the classroom that teacher could already be doing, is uneccessary and distracting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1311563e9b64,B0A08E744DF1,I am sure there are some upsides to this ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+cef14ec0a268,B0A08E744DF1,but it really just feels like an invasion of the students privacy. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+0278709bfc23,B0A08E744DF1,"In the article is says "" ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrucor' "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+769ee0088c09,B0A08E744DF1,"The teacher can not just modify an entire lesson because one student is confused, that is unfair to the students that understand the lesson already. Instead, the teacher could work with the student individually and help them with what they are having trouble with. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e7fc8afb5db,B0A08E744DF1,"All in all, adding more uneccessary technology into the classroom would be distracting to the students and an invaison of their privacy. The ""Facial Action Coding system"" could be useful somewhere else, just not the classroom. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f4bb6dc8dc46,B0AD7021AB07,"Kobe Bryant is known for his signature jump shot, the Fade-away. It's unique, it's effective, and it's his style. In the classroom, every student dreads the word ""project"". Projects are meant to test comprehension on a given topic. The problem with teacher-designed projects is that they are boring and predictable. The teacher-designed projects also have specific guidelines, which doesn't allow students to expand their thinking and express their knowledge in a way they would like to. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e6c7183992f5,B0AD7021AB07,Summer school projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9af64923d28f,B0AD7021AB07,"it allows students to show their own creativity, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+743dadeb8d0e,B0AD7021AB07,"the students would put in effort with something they are passionate about, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e546bd0ac9c1,B0AD7021AB07,teacher-led projects are too basic. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b6d8d9318d3,B0AD7021AB07,"Lamar Jackson and LeBron James strive in their respective sports for one reason, their style. If every athlete were to shoot the basketball the same way, or throw the football the same way, then there would be no point in watching the games! These sporting events are exciting because every athlete has their own style of play. The same could be said in the classroom. If every student in a class presented a slide show or an essay for their project, I bet the teacher would fall asleep in an instant! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3b8aed5ee23a,B0AD7021AB07,Student-designed projects gives the opportunity for the students to really show their creativity and understanding in a way that is special to them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e422c29eb9cc,B0AD7021AB07,"Imagine sitting through a class where every single student presented with a slide show; It's so simple that a baby could make the same project. Teacher-designed projects don't give the opportunity for students to really show how well they understand the topic. Repetition in the classroom is very toxic. Having the same boring project guideline for every student doesn't engage the students in any way at all. The student-designed projects show diversity and creativity; on the other hand, teacher-designed projects are extremely dull and unoriginal. The teacher-designed projects have such a strict rubric that makes the students roll their eyes. The biggest flaw of it all is that the students are only trying to satisfy the teacher, rather than trying to fully comprehend the subject. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+464157fb6ce3,B0AD7021AB07,"When someone is passionate about anything, they give it their all. When I'm on the lacrosse field, I give my 100% every time I step on the turf. Passion in life forces the best result in any moment. If students were able to lead their own project, then an astonishing grade would be guaranteed. Kobe Bryant is one of the basketball players because of his passion for the game and the amount of work he puts in to get better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bafdaed85062,B0AD7021AB07,"In the classroom, students would put in a tremendous amount of effort if they were given the chance to do a project in their own way. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d206cf8ee949,B0AD7021AB07,"The way Carlos Santana strums a guitar is iconic and infamous; no other living creature can imitate his style. In the classroom, an assignment is ruined when the students don't get to show their creativity and way of thinking. Teacher-designed projects make students think inside the box, and they are trapped with a specific set of rules that they cannot pass. Projects are meant to test the student on their knowledge on the subject, but most students only do the project for a passing grade and not for their own comprehension. Summer school projects should be student-designed because the students are able to form something in their own style, they would put in effort into something they are passionate about, and the teacher-designed projects are plain and disgusting. A teacher-designed project is a vanilla ice cream cone, while a student-designed project is an ice cream cone with nuts, chocolate syrup, and a cherry on top.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bbf8daadaf2f,B0C80C0550D7,"In 1976, the Viking 1 spacecraft was orbiting the planet of Mars, and it was taking new pictures for all of mankind to see. As it was passing over a strip of Mars called Cydonia, it snapped a picture that would cause an uproar in space exploration. This new picture showed what seemed to be a human face. A few days later NASA reveled these pictures for the world to see; it was an instant hit ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7cdca0c73946,B0C80C0550D7,"Conspiracy theorist were fast to make speculations that this was ancient alien architecture or something of the sort. But NASA said that the face was just a geograghical coincidence, and there is no alien stucture on Mars. ",Position,Effective,,,
+213f467e577c,B0C80C0550D7,One reason that consiracy theorist could beleive that this could be an alien stucture is that the resolution of the first picture was very low. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a3ae5f36ea6c,B0C80C0550D7,"n paragraph 10 it says,"" ...43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."" This shows that the photo didn't give very compelling evidence that there was life on Mars. soon later NASA and their supporters claimed that this face is just an act of nature is because of the 1998 Global Surveyor spacecraft. This new spaceship passed over the red planet to take pictures of the ""face on Mars"". The pictures were ten times better than the last pictures of Cydonia this time. The new photos clearly showed a landform on Mars and not a man. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+01e8e02a8574,B0C80C0550D7,"But even after these new pictures conspiracy theorist were still bent on the idea that NASA was trying to cover something up. In spite of the new pictures people said that the day the photo was taken, it was cloudy. Therefor the photos couldn't be very accurate ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2e4269ccf6f7,B0C80C0550D7,"In fact, these theorists were right. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9c88eb8b528,B0C80C0550D7,"The day the photo was taken was in winter. It says in paragraph 8 that, "" ... it was winter in April '98- a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet."" These facts show that the landmass could indead be hidden by clouds. However, NASA still supported their claim that it was just a misinterpreted natural landform. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8f193d0482e2,B0C80C0550D7,"While NASA never spoke negatively about the theory, they set out again to prove it wrong. on April 8, 2001, the Mars Global Surveyor came over the face on Mars, and it took photos with a resolution of 1.56 meters per pixel; the highest ever yet. What these pictures showed was what would be a butte or a mesa on Earth. These landforms are very common in Cydonia, so the pictures were very realistic. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b1f68ab6cfe2,B0C80C0550D7,"With very high resolutioned photos, it is hard for conspiracy theorists to still say that there is face on Mars. It even says in paragraph 11,"" So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9e8be3f72d02,B0C80C0550D7,"In conclusion, the face on mars is supported and not supported. NASA has proven with photographic evidence that it is just a natural occurance while conspiracy theorists say that it is a martian civilization. I think that NASA's facts are very believable, and they have the science to back up their claim. I hope that in the future, more people will base their beleifs off of science and not fictional conspiracy theories. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ab49c68c9035,B0CA3173B40D,"One summer, I had to work on a long packet of math problems my teacher assigned the class over summer. I was not the biggest fan of summer projects but it helped me understand the material for the fall season. If the class had made the packet instead of the teacher, I don't think I would have understood the material. Since some schools require a summer project people wonder whether it should be teacher-designed or student-designed. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e1e979c0359d,B0CA3173B40D,I think the summer assignments should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+11648b42655b,B0CA3173B40D,"teachers know what the students need to learn over the summer, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e39ccd3b1c31,B0CA3173B40D,"have experience with assignment composition, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+82fcf3ec4ba5,B0CA3173B40D,make the assignments challenging rather than easy. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d286cd21691f,B0CA3173B40D,"Teachers are the people who give their students the knowledge to be successful. They go to college to gain the knowledge about their interests. Often, they are passionate enough to share their interest by teaching. Therefore, the most skilled person in the classroom is the teacher, because of their knowledge about the subject. I don't know enough about my school subjects to teach them, because I'm still in the process of learning them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b14db53280d,B0CA3173B40D,"Teachers understand the format that works best with their students, something the students don't know enough about. Teachers can create a worksheet or document that is created to help students learn. Even younger teachers can create well composed projects because they had college classes to develop teaching skills. Older teachers have so much experience that they can craft an assignment with ease. I could not make an assignment for other students, because I lack the necessary experience to create expertly composed documents that teachers design to be efficient learning materials for the summer. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c3acc593ceb,B0CA3173B40D,"In order to develop a student's brain, teachers will challenge them with harder material to complete. More often than not, students aren't academically active over summer break leading to poor performance. Teachers don't want their students to forget everything they've learned in the previous year. If teachers made easier summer projects, then all the students would not be prepared for school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f2d6377695e4,B0CA3173B40D,"Since teachers know the material they need to give students, have knowledge in project composition, and make challenges for the students, they should be constructing the summer assignments. They are the best fit for the role of educating and summer assignments are how students learn without the teacher. Teachers, creating the assignment, put their knowledge and experience into the assignment. Students do not have knowledge and experience teaching. With that said, students should be an input for education, while teachers continue to be an output for it. This would fulfill the roles of student and teachers leaving each to what they're best at. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+506a78bb1cd9,B0CCFA21F82C,My principal says we all have to participate in at least one after school activity. I totally agree with him. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e536e1e1ecb0,B0CCFA21F82C,One of the reasons why is so we can make more friends and be more comfortable aorund people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cb821c3deb1,B0CCFA21F82C,The reason why we need to have friends and be more comfortable around people is because friends are always a important part of a persons life. Comfort is also really important because most jobs involve people and if you're uncomfortable around people that could be a problem. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bcd05a922ba,B0CCFA21F82C,One of my other reasons is because it helps you with communicaton. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9893a6da13c8,B0CCFA21F82C,you can't always be right or get the last word. If one person feels sad and everyone else is happy it's unfair to have one person so we have to consider their feelings too. Therefore I feel like communication is very important because without it it's very hard to do group activities ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e2044ee9b6d,B0CCFA21F82C,it allows you to have fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ef27cc3548f,B0CCFA21F82C,Having fun is very important because we are still young and still deserve to have fun doing the stuff we love with the people we love. If we aren't having any fun as a young person we most likely won't have very much fun older. Not having could lead to sadness which isn't a good thing. It also gives us motivation to get through the day because we know at the end of the day we get to do the thing we love most. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fe89d66a01a,B0CCFA21F82C,These are my reasons why I agree with my principal.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5bc71bbd68e3,B0EA4F7B076C,The author supports his ideas in this passage good because he lists all the good details when he's going to support something ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f541de6db15,B0EA4F7B076C,"When the author talks about the Venus he has explantation showing how to explain that. In the passage it says "" Venus is the second planet from our sun"". It's also in our solar system, Venus is sometimes called '""Evening Star"",is one of the brighest points in the sky. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7e873d755f3,B0EA4F7B076C,The author has different details and has found them. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ed3d00e157f2,B0EA4F7B076C,"The author talks about different stuff how our sister plant is so inhospitable"". Scientists also see and search what's going on in the world and in the planets. I think it's good that we know some of these stuff so we know in the future that can happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38f2029eb5c0,B0EA4F7B076C,If you don't know none of these details you can search stuff online. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2c29139c9fb2,B0EA4F7B076C,It's also good knowing these stuff because it's better to know them. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+822c3772fbf8,B0EA4F7B076C,Scientists do a lot of researching that's going around the world and earth. Also Venus is worthy to know what dangercan happen. It can get to 170 degrees Fahrenheit the air will be close to the area. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d5013c88dcc1,B0EA4F7B076C,"The solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Also says in paragraph 5 that's not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. Venus from a ship orbiting or havering safely far above. There is different facts about everything. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8011a3d04b6d,B0EA4F7B076C,For the last paragraph it should be about how the world is working now. In paragraph 8 striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus. There should be limits by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination. Imagine exposing the cellphone and all that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee9fea25f644,B0EB441FDE3A,"In this essay I will be giving an argument on why this so called ""face"" is not made by aliens.
+
+The prompt tells you that one of your colleagues says that it is created by aliens.
+
+My job in this essay is to tell why it isn't and give an explanation.
+
+The figure that NASA saw was a so called ""face on mars"".
+
+They claimed that it was in the shape of a human head and it was thought to be made by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b33d0b5874f6,B0EB441FDE3A,In my oppinion this is not made by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd68b4c76d89,B0EB441FDE3A,"Here is a reason why.
+
+All these years NASA has gone to a two or three planets looking for aliens.
+
+Throughout the years how many have we found, none! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23bdad4b5a5a,B0EB441FDE3A,"Yes, we may have found some traces of aliens, but we can not prove that these are actually alien tracks, or alien lifeforms.
+
+There is no way to prove that this structure was made by aliens, unless we have images of them, and so far we have none. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc9fa3094e1f,B0EB441FDE3A,"Look down on earth.
+
+How many mesas or Buttes do we have in America, or even around the world?
+
+Now think about this, were these man made? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+96945e19ce9e,B0EB441FDE3A,"No, none of these land formations were man made!
+
+They are formed naturally by nature.
+
+Now over the years we have found a lot of reasons how Mars is sort of like the earth.
+
+It carries water, and it is one of the easiest planets to get to, so if you think about it, Mars could have the same land formations as we do!
+
+Nature is a beautiful thing, and it more than likely made this so called ""face"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ac2dfe7c1f51,B0EB441FDE3A,"Yes, you may be right in some way.
+
+Yes, we have found traces of aliens over the years.
+
+This COULD have been made by aliens.
+
+Maybe they are trying to connect to other life outside of their planet.
+
+That is the only argument that you have against me. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0ca905ce9b6d,B0EB441FDE3A,"The argument that isn't even factual.
+
+You are going off of a guess in your mind. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b2411ab2110c,B0EB441FDE3A,"So overall in this essay I have covered three thing.
+
+I have covered my first argument, which is that we have not found aliens even though we have been searching all of these years.
+
+I have covered my second argument, which is that nature has formed many structures like this on earth, it could have been formed out of the land.
+
+And I also covered the rebuttle, which is that there is a possibility that this was built by aliens because we have found traces.
+
+So in conclusion, this structure was not built by humans, this was land made. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+52c0e91fb7f3,B127CFD81E92,"Do you want to be forced to do an activity that you'd not want to do, or have an extra activity to deal with after school? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7ed015b4b601,B127CFD81E92,"I think not, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+272615c86425,B127CFD81E92,well apparently some schools are thinking about having students do at least one extracurricular activity after school. They also they might force kids do activities that there not interested in to get used to the real world. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+576cf8cca270,B127CFD81E92,"After school activities might take away some free time that you may have at home, about almost the whole world does something after school as to sports, getting a job, and much more. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+33b8a039f440,B127CFD81E92,"Sometimes people are busy all the time, like, people that do sports after school, some of them don't get out of there sports practice or games after sometime, mostly around 9:00pm. Personally, people are great for doing after school activities, but I'm not one of those people, and I will never be, unless its something with basketball, or an activity that I'd want to do on my free time, but it usually waists a lot of free time, and I'm one of those people that like to do homework, especially since I get a lot of it. So what I'm trying to say is, we have a life too, were not always just on our technology 24/7, were actually trying to do things that are good for us. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+303653b5871f,B127CFD81E92,"After school activities might give you some hard time, and might put pressure on you to do a certain something for them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97a9e3de9b44,B127CFD81E92,"Photographers job is to take pictures, and put it into a book, or a frame for people. Yearbook photographers take pictures, but what you don't know is, that they have to help the year book makers, and helpers to put those pictures into the yearbook, and the worst thing is, that they might not have enough people, some might be sick, or some might just not have enough time, and that can be bad sometimes. Lets say your a year book photographer, and your taking pictures, and your friend is sick, then you realize that you have to go through all the pictures you took, and pick which one is best, or which one seems yearbook appropriate. After you go through the pictures you then realize that all your friends in the yearbook photographer club are all either on vacation, or sick, so your alone, and you need the pictures to be in the year book by tomorrow, but you have no access to internet, because your friends are the ones that have the internet, and can turn in the pictures, then once everyone thought that they would get there yearbooks, they didn't, because all of one day and the day you needed your friends to be there. Let me tell you that, that is stressful, because some people could blame you, but it was never your fault. If this were me I would be so mad, because I would know I would get blamed on. So, being in an after school activity can be stressful especially in one you know your gonna have a hard time in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+58b7ccd7619f,B127CFD81E92,"After school activities don't give you money, or necessities you need for that club, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6fad6690581,B127CFD81E92,"most schools won't give you money because they always need it for their own school necessities, and I think thats great and all, but think about the students that do sports, photography, and serve as student council, and do all of this work. People joined because they thought it was going to be fun, and they thought, oh I'm not gonna have stress this could be relaxing for me, but no, the school will give them so much to do. Lets go back to the year book photographers, they take so many photos after, or for clubs almost every week, and they get nothing for it, they dont even get a copy of a yearbook. The sport kids don't need money, but at least give them better gear for there own sport that they play. I think that the schools should put more money into sports, and people that need better necessities like the clubs and the people that are in school, after school for reasons that would be good. I think that people should stop worrying about there kids with after school activities and start to worry about the jobs they get, parents should have there kids working young for small amounts of money and work there way up the money that they get paid, kids should have a job around high school time maybe in 9th grade even because whats gonna happen when your child doesnt get a job, the parents are still gonna have to buy them food, cook for them, and have them waist more electricity and also some water bills so i think kids should stop worrying no what to do and start worrying where their gonna work at. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96d5a71c6fff,B127CFD81E92,Some might say its better for kids to do after school activities ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7ef1a71d36bc,B127CFD81E92,"and I agree, students usually at middle school should try and sign up for something that will benefit for them like, sports and maybe some extra lessons to keep up their grade up, or try out and be ahead of everyone else, now while that may seem bad its really not, because it's there choice if they want to take geometry one year and take algebra 2 in the summer, or after school everyday. They'll be on their way to getting a good job or even be being the next Albert Einstein, who knows? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8a19d1382a13,B127CFD81E92,"Now while that may be true some parents sometimes push there kids into taking those after school activities, and thats always a bad thing because, I think that the parents should respect there kids opinion about doing an after school activity. I also know, I know, I don't want my mom screaming at me telling me what I can, or can't do. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+21b3bd2ec3fd,B127CFD81E92,"In conclusion, doing an after school activity is all up to the parent and and student. In my opinion I wouldnt because of the time it takes, and hard times that it might bring you in like those photographers and sports people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1da96844b0c2,B150E66D6C5B,The face is a natural landform because aliens are not rule. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4c2a5f2b5f9b,B150E66D6C5B,Well aliens can be rule if someone makes then and sand them off somewhere but not the point. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+228ecb145bbc,B150E66D6C5B,"The ponit is "" the face on mars."" Yes it can be created by an alien if them were rule but there not so it maens one thing the face on mars is a natural landform. NASA can be making it up to like they can go up to mars and put the ""face"" were it is or something can move it. NASA can do something like that but I hlop they didn't.
+
+The face on mars could also be from someone going up tp mars and on one knowing but someone would have seen it go up. All I need to say is i think it is a natural man made landfrom or a natural landform. Bad new is no one will know wath happen or how it was made. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e24e2770ad6c,B154F5F9DADF,"Cars are the most common use of transportation is todays society, but can limiting car usage be beniftial to our citizens? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4273cf9448f4,B154F5F9DADF,this can benefit you. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fb58f9b4b1cd,B154F5F9DADF,"Have you ever considered walking over driving, maybe even biking over driving, if not i want you to consider it next time you go to the gym or wherever you go. Limiting our car usage can be done in many types pf ways, such as: walking, biking, or jogging. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d76e4c37a119,B154F5F9DADF,"If we walk instead ov drive not only are we getting to where we need to be, but you also get a workout. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d70a0dce8a6,B154F5F9DADF,"We all know how we complain about gas prices, so if you cut back on driving you wont have to worry about gas. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b4d9790fe62,B154F5F9DADF,These are just two of many ways we can limit our car usage.     ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6a7b121e23a1,B181B21A4FA6,"In the article the author states,""Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors"" meaning getting humans to another planet, in particular Venus, will be extraordinary research and could lead humankind to staying for many more centuries ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+877993f290a5,B181B21A4FA6,"If we find that we can live on Venus with this research, then why shouldn't we. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+52474e448091,B181B21A4FA6,"There were a lot of failed missions to the moon and now look what we know about it. We learned so much because people decided to risk their lives in order for us to learn more about the universe. We can do so much good with the world and if we have the choice of trying to go to Venus, shouldn't we try? The only way we know we're going to fail is if we don't try and not trying would be a diservice to people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b8427af349b,B181B21A4FA6,"Besides, what if we get to make friends with aliens? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d326e81da132,B1F07D72CCB4,If I was a scientist I would convience them that the face in the ground was just a natural landform in many ways ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7579b6245193,B1F07D72CCB4,Some people around the world think things like this would be great to brag about ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+4e29c5f9992e,B1F07D72CCB4,In this sitiuation We're trying to convience people and tell them that aliens has nothing to do with this. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f7262e6c4022,B1F07D72CCB4,"In this article, it says that it isn't alien related ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e13bd68a5322,B1F07D72CCB4,"Reasons that I would conclude is, as scientists research it is just a landform. Scientists also says that its just another Martian mesa. It's related to the red planet Cydonia. As the one scientist took it among himself and took the picture alot of times just to get a great angle of it everyone was waiting for it. Even web surfers this was a huge impact on the people believing that it was a alien. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d03ec5d8361a,B1F07D72CCB4,As I read more not all the people were ok with the problem ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a677da2cf65e,B1F07D72CCB4,Seems that scientists had found more. If I were a scientist I would gather evidence and all my documents from things that were related to this previous sitiuation. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+54ee73e01121,B1F07D72CCB4,I would also show them pictures back then of the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81787e3c3548,B1F07D72CCB4,It would be amazing because as a scientist you should always check for yourself. If you did a previous report on that planet or subject I think you should bring your old evidence and documents out to make things come together to understand better. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+516eea52f74b,B1F07D72CCB4,"In this article, I've learned alot about what scientists go through and they they busy life is. It was exciting reading about this and exploring something like this.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7a0e5986912c,B1FAD06077ED,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" definitely uses a lot of big words to describe the difficulties and other details of venus in general, but do they know what they are talking about? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aca8baf3a1f4,B1FAD06077ED,"By carefully examining the text and pondering their ideas of the planets surface and difficuties of gaining access to venus , one could definitely say that yes, the author does support their idea very well. But this is a planet that can crush submarines like soda cans. ",Position,Effective,,,
+ebe642e9e789,B1FAD06077ED,The author does prove some interesting points about the planets terrain and how we could work to develop technology for it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+48f2da404402,B1FAD06077ED,"The author supports their ideas about the planet in a way that is hard for me to make an argument over, and uses information that is soid to the point where you don't want to try fact checking them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ca64b974668,B1FAD06077ED,"While they use counter arguments to violent conditions on the surface of the foreign planet, such as the idea of solar energy to use the powerful radiation. The author definitely knows what they are talking about, and sounds like they have some experience in debate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0236f169daf4,B1FAD06077ED,The author claims that the limits of these terrifying endeavors should not be limited by the planets harsh conditions. The author also claims that the planet is hot enough to melt most types of metal. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f4849da268f,B1FAD06077ED,Those two statements counter each other due to the question of how we would get a material that can't melt in order to build safety equipment. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+498a12babbbb,B1FAD06077ED,"While the author has some things that need explained more in depth, they definitely know how to prove a point. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9be8b46ac674,B216794ACCCA,"The conflict of whether or not scientists should study the planet Venus has been up in the air, no pun intended, for sometime now. Many individuals think that studying Venus up close is too dangerous, whereas others disagree and think risks should be made. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d007be95e447,B216794ACCCA,"In the article, ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author thinks studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, but does not support this idea very well. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7e35eb0db75d,B216794ACCCA,The author describes the potential dangers that could result from studying Venus which contradicts their idea that the observations made through studying Venus overweigh the risks. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c8435d32f3a5,B216794ACCCA,"The author is aware of the fact and describes how, ""no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours"" (paragraph 2). Right off the bat, the author gives their audience the mindset that it is not a good idea to study Venus. Having that fact in the first few paragraphs of the article sets the tone for the rest of the article. In paragraph three, the author goes into great detail about several of the potential dangers that can come from studying Venus because of its, ""clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid"" (paragraph 3). The frightening environment described strays the audience even further away from believing that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5bd0f176d05d,B216794ACCCA,"Not only does the author describe why dangers are present on the planet Venus, but they also gives analogies in regards to the danger present ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ac98ac3fec2,B216794ACCCA,"including the fact that, ""such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans"" (paragraph 3). At this point in the article, the idea of having a human explore and study Venus up close in unthinkable. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2102ff0fb3a6,B216794ACCCA,The author tries to justify the dangers by explaining technology that will be used in order to allow individuals to study Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4dfe167a6b3,B216794ACCCA,"The author describes, ""a vehicle hovering over Venus"" (paragraph 5). At first, the technological advances that could be made sound like a good idea, but the author goes on to say how, ""tempertaures would still be toasty at around 170 degress Fahrenheit"" (paragraph 5). This fact completely shuts down the idea of the hovering vehicle. The author contradicts their ideas by explaining the dangers in depth and giving reason as to why studying Venus is not a good idea. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e23123f6a10f,B216794ACCCA,"From the very first descriptions of the idea the author is trying to bring across, the audience is turned away from the author's opinion. The tone set sways the audience toward one direction of the conflict while the author is in the other direction. The author went too far into detail about the dangers that can come from studying Venus and di not have evidence of how it would be safe and possible at all. The author's idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers was not supported through their ideas or evidence.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1a7c550fbb3a,B2426E4674E7,"Studying Venus seems almost impossible with all the risks, but the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" suggests that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite all the dangers it presents. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d5baed07f073,B2426E4674E7,The author certainly proves their idea on why they think studying the planet Venus is worth it. The author supports their idea by making sure to back it up with evidence. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e125f8cb6829,B2426E4674E7,"In ""The challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author supports their idea well by explaining Venus's relationship with Earth, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+004cf77efe15,B2426E4674E7,"how landing on Venus is possible, and the power human curiosity can have. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9e19c7e05e5,B2426E4674E7,The author's use of evidence shows readers how seriously they took what they were writing. All the points they made were backed up by evidence on why they felt that way. The author made sure to clearly support each and every point made in their writing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+157ecf7121b9,B2426E4674E7,"First, the author uses Venus's relationship to our own planet, Earth, to support their ideas. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+be414ca6e44a,B2426E4674E7,"For instance, ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth"" (4). The excerpt above illistrates some of the similar features Venus has to Earth. The author uses the similarities of the planets to support their idea of venus being a worthy pursuit. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+36a35a0c9e72,B2426E4674E7,"The text also states, ""Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel"" (4). The author uses this sentence to support their idea by explaining how Venus is one of the nearest options to Earth for space travel. Saving travel time is one way Venus shows it is a worthy pursuit. Overall, the author uses the relationship the planets Earth and Venus have with eachother to support their thoughts. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e3c6bb99275a,B2426E4674E7,"Secondly, the author uses the point of human curiosity to support the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+75b6fd9953a4,B2426E4674E7,"To illistrate, ""...human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors"" (8). The author explains how humans are naturally curious, and how this curiosity often times leads them to dangerous situations. Studying Venus has its dangers, but it is no different. Also stated, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation"" (8). The author is promoting curiosity because it leads us to new things. Curiosity can overcome the fear of danger when exploring Venus to help us learn new things about the planet. To summarize, the power of curiosity in people is something the author uses to support their opinion of Venus being worth it to explore. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+231cf1af9c9f,B2426E4674E7,"Additionally, the author uses evidence about how landing on Venus is possible to support their idea that it is a worthy pursuit. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+eb62ecaac86c,B2426E4674E7,"For example, ""At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth"" (5). The author uses this piece of evidence to demonstrate that Venus's conditions are possible for humans to survive, making Venus a serious contendor for space exploration. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c5aae0257b1,B2426E4674E7,"The author also states, ""Some simplified electronics... have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions"" (7). The author backs up her idea by using these electronics, that can survive three weeks on venus, to once again show that we can get through to venus. Science and technology being able to help us properly function on Venus shows that the planet is a worthy pursuit. Ultimately, the author backs up her idea by giving evidence on the different ways landing on Venus is possible. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97d31adf198f,B2426E4674E7,"In conclusion, the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" demonstrates how despite the dangers Venus presents, it is worthy of pursuing. Exploring venus seems like it is almost impossible with all the risks it offers, but the author makes it clear in this article that they disagree. Their use of evidence in their writing to support their belief that Venus is a worthy pursuit shows how well researched their case is. The author used evidence on Venus's relationship to Earth, how landing on Venus is possible, and the natural curiosity humans have to support their idea. After taking a look at this article, readers know that the points made in ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" were very nicely supported. The author's support made their idea a thought provoking case. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ade802bc3ffa,B24EE1A93A0B,"Would you be willing to figure out what is going on in Vebus? In the articule The Challenges of Exploring Venus there are scientist that want to find more about Venus. Venus is referred to as Earth's ""twin"". Would you be willing to explore or send Items to explore Venus, so we can know more about it? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c13e0caec13c,B24EE1A93A0B,"Its would be amazing if NASA could get samples of the rock, gas, and other things on Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+76835d0b7f58,B24EE1A93A0B,"The reason it would be amazing is so that we can know how Venus is just like our earth they call Venus Eath's ""twin"" so it would be amzaing if they had a lot more in common. NASA is willing to send people there but the only problem is that it is to hot there for people to go there and land there and take samples. The only way NASA said they could send people was if thyey could hover over Venus at about thirty miles or so, that is about how high a jet airplane fly. NASA would like to make things so that humans do not have to risk there lives to get samples so NASA is making some things in the articule it says this ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+759ea53edc50,B24EE1A93A0B,"""NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad724d09bbb7,B24EE1A93A0B,"For example, some simplidied electronis made os silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulatiing to chaos of Venus's surface and hahve lasted for three weeks in such conditions""(7). Nasa finally thinks they have found somethng they could use that was made a lon time ago. it is called the mechanical computer the device was first envisioned in the 1800s and played a important role in the 1940s during WWII. the reason scientist believe they can use this is because the device makes calculations by using gears and leavers and do not need electronics at all, so they are saying systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce8c2e0fe330,B24EE1A93A0B,After all would you decide to help out and figure out more about Venus? Scientist are doing a great job so far with everything they are figuring out about what could be more helpful to them. They also know that is can be safe for them to hover over Venus instead of landing on it and having a horrible tragidy. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+45c1a1b24528,B24EE1A93A0B,They have a lot of leads of what they can use and lets hope he can find more out about Venus in a couple of years. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b8d7a8967d65,B295BC411B70,There are a lot of advantages on why we should limit car usage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0bff7f714193,B295BC411B70,Limiting car usage to save money will help alot of families out ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8173a935563,B295BC411B70,"you dont always have to spend your money on buying a new car everytime it brakes down haveing to buy a car when it stops woking is a lot of money like $40,000. You can be using that money to buy food for your house or buying new parts for your car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+873dbf36ef70,B295BC411B70,you would probably have to find a place that you can put your car like a garage at work or a parking lot that will have to fit millions of cars at a time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92a35c6b1f95,B295BC411B70,"In Vauban,Germany 70% of the people do not own cars and 57% sold a car just so that they can move to Germany. They have only sold them because in Germany there isnt alot of room thats why they have to descrease the usage of cars too. In the united states some people dont have cars because of the gas price or because they cant really aford a car. In Bogota,Colombia millions of colombians either have hiked,biked,or took buses on a car-free day to aviod traffic jams ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afaa6f4339e1,B295BC411B70,It is also a good way to take away stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd73e152226f,B295BC411B70,air pollution tyo help the earth out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9927fd9c760,B295BC411B70,Also not a lot of people care about getting a listens because they find it better to walk or car pool with friend or use public transpotation so that is really helping out our planet because on less person means less on polluting the earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fe86116dedd,B295BC411B70,the only bad thing is that when they have children they are going to have to buy cars so they can beable to take their children were they need to get to like school or some kind of sports practice ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f19a46f24402,B295BC411B70,"So limiting car usage is good for the community and pedestrians, bicycle can be a good way to get places it saves time , lowers emissions and improves safety so there are no more traffic jams. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f95065d37e90,B2D57A646363,"Since the invention of automobiles, cars have become a neccessity in the world. They have shaped our society today and are used by virtually anyone you see nowadays. However, car usage has had its toll on many aspects of our life today. Some places in the world have even gone as far to ban cars to promote a better lifestyle ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+38b5922ecc7b,B2D57A646363,Limiting car usage is a great idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a138e49c29b,B2D57A646363,it helps the environment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c76ce935338,B2D57A646363,the intrigue of having a car is slowly degenerating. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a988fb2641ce,B2D57A646363,"Cars are part of the reason that our environment needs constant monitoring. Transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, only behind power plants. Our polluted air is mostly made by all of the smog that cars create. Even every-day citizens have taken a step in helping our environment. According to Source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, A businessman, Carlos Arturo Plaza, stated that ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution."" This shows that the problem our environment is facing has even caught the attention of ordinary people. Smog has also become a big issue due to the excessive driving of cars. According to Source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog, ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear ther air of the global city."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+697d92d04fce,B2D57A646363,"excessive smog has become such an issue that now driving has to be banned in order to help our environment, even if just temporarily. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1f7ff13534c,B2D57A646363,"Cars are not as ground-breaking as they used to be. In fact, the driving of cars has been steadily decreasing throughout the years. According to Source 4: The End of Car Culture, ""recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb55593dd8e5,B2D57A646363,"The limiting of cars could lead to a variety of new possibilities. It could help better our environment and help make the world a better place for future generations. Also, cars just do not seem as appealing as they used to. New technology and forms of transportation has reduced the need for cars and one day, cars may not be needed at all for our society to thrive. Limiting car use could have a very beneficial effect to not only people today, but also to the people of tomorrow.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a8adb2049e20,B3176BB24009,"In a school, there are clasrooms upon classrooms that are all teaching different, new, and exciting classes. When walking down a hallway, it is more than possible that the sounds of logorithmic functions could be taught to your left as Shakespeare might be being recited to your right. If you take a turn, one kid may be leaving his photography class to go take pictures for the yearbook while another may be returning from the restroom to go back to her chemistry class where she is studying saturated and unstaurated solutions. Despite the intense differences and varities of classes that there are at a high school, not every one of them is ""new"", ""different"", and ""exciting,"" as used previously to describe the classrooms scenes to all kids. Therefore, if it were at all possible that these kids could feel and want to be more engaged in their classes that take up a large portion of their week and youth, the way to do so should be evident in the classrooms. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d0ac49e31fd5,B3176BB24009,"With this in mind, the idea that using Facial Action Coding Systems in classrooms would be valuable is not only true, but something that should be acted upon. (D'Alto). ",Position,Effective,,,
+ed36b80ce593,B3176BB24009,"In the life of someone that is attending school, there is one idea that is always looming over their shoulder. Whether it be like a cloud on a rainy day or a shadow following them on a sunny one, grades are always an important factor in a school-goer's life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8854b9680a3d,B3176BB24009,"Therefore, if this porgram would be able to help kids to be more interested in a topic and be more involved, they may just have improved grades from this system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0df6ec73e00,B3176BB24009,"In the text, the excerpt, ""'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming cofused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts,"" shows that student's attention could be analyazed. (D'Alto, 6). With this being done, if the computer would be able to recgonize confusion, the student could then be introduced to a better way to learn the material or a way that they beter understand it, then leading to better grades. (D'Alto, 6). Also, the grades of the students could improve based on what the computer decides to do with as much human touch as it can. The passage, ""'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,'"" shows that there is a solution to any problems a kid may have with what they are learning. (D'Alto 6). The fact that the computer attempts to try and help the students with a human touch shows that it would have the capibilties to do it's best and help the students to learn better, overall improving the student's grades. (D'Alto 6). With both of these examples in mind, it can be seen that the inclusion of this sytem into classrooms would have the capability to improve both a student's grades and understanding. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+64ac5a317eb8,B3176BB24009,"When a kid is sitting in a classroom for an hour, atleast, every day to every other day, there is seemable reason as to why and how a kid could get easily side tracked and/or bored. Despite this being true, the inclusion of this program into student's lives may have the ability to greatly improve student's engagement and interest in the classroom. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b068634ad1de,B3176BB24009,"In this article, the author includes, ""'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional connection,' notes Dr. Huang. 'So computers need to understand that, too,'"" shows just how the students may become more engaged and interested in their classes that take up so much of their week days. (D'Alto 6). If the computers would be able to connect with the students, there is no reason that these kids would not feel more obligatred to pay attention and more interested to learn what is being taught. (D'Alto 6). Another reason that these kids would gain more by having this system in their schools is the idea that would engage them in a fun manner. When the author included, ""The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can really do,"" the reason is stated so in the text. (D'Alto 6). By including this piece, the author is showing that there, overall, is a fun factor to this could intrigue the students and keep them interested in their assignments and school overall. With these two ideas in mind, it can be seen that, as the attention of students is a primary need for schools, if this could improve just that, there is no reason not to include it in student's lives. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+17ac54e1cc16,B3176BB24009,"As science is an ever-budding field by it's own nature, there is no reason that a new technology wouldn't thrive among those interested in both science and technology. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+12071c0e8897,B3176BB24009,"Therefore, as this is something that is new and up and coming, the addition of this to clasrooms may spark a pasion for this subject and inspire a career to form. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cceebcf21232,B3176BB24009,"In the excerpt, ""The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckham Institute for Advanvced Science at the University of Illinois, working in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam,"" shows just how recent this technology is. (D'Alto 1). With this in mind, if students were able to be introduced and subject to this technology, there could be future scientist that want to further improve this technology and, until then, would be more involved in it's place at school. (D'Alto 1). Also, due to the fact that this technology is not only limited to the classroom, it is then evident that other jobs could be produced out of this technology being in the classroom, sparking interest in young and vulnerable students. As the author includes, ""The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive--for video games or video surgery,"" it is showsn just exactly how various the fields are that this technology could be used in. (D'Alto 6). Whether a kid is devoted to learning about medicne or engrossed in playing games, it has been shown that this technology in the classrooms would expose these kids to it's capabilities and potentially create a passion. (D'Alto 6). Therefore, by including this technolgy in the classroom with it's own purpose, the students would be subject to technolgy that is blooming in several fields and could easily inspire a child to become something that utilizes this technology in their future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3c22624bf644,B3176BB24009,"As kids are ever-subject to new and upcoming ideas, it is evident that the addition of recent techology could aid their progression in school and would be deemed as important and valuable to include. If a kid were someone that easily lost interest in a course or was not very interested in a certain class, they may then be more provoked to learn and pay attention if this new technology was included at their school and interested them. By doing so, there is potential that the student would then be able to improve their grade and get much out of this porgram. Also, if a student were to be even intrigued in this technology, there could be potential for this studen to go into a job field that dealt with this type of technology as there are many that vary greatly in doing so. Overall, the inclusion of present innovations and technology should be including the next generations, as success for them now will lead to future success for all. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+486e80c0eb0d,B3388EF1E80C,"Summer is a great way to take a break from school, but also to apply knowledge to the real world. In some areas, students are required to complete summer projects to ensure they continue to learn over their break. These projects are usually designed by the teachers, who want their students to be as prepared as possible for what they will learn in the fall. However, some argue that summer projects should be designed by students, as they can create engaging ways to educate themselves. This can better prepare students for the ways they will apply what they learned in school in the real world. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e47dcbefc306,B3388EF1E80C,Summer projects should be designed by students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b34a6eb22675,B3388EF1E80C,"they can create projects they want to complete, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1041b490ffc4,B3388EF1E80C,"they can incorporate their real-world knowledge and experience, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f8533ca268b2,B3388EF1E80C,they can design a project they know will be possible for them to complete. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9c523a369299,B3388EF1E80C,"Despite the benefits of student-designed projects, those who favor ones designed by teachers point to the fact that teachers can base projects off the curriculum students will have to learn during the school year and thus help students feel more prepared. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1da59ea67a1c,B3388EF1E80C,"However, students who design these summer projects can easily be given a description of the required curriculum to guide them while they design their projects. This will allow them to find ways they can incorporate the material into an achievable project. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d45242c5cdd1,B3388EF1E80C,"Additionally, teachers who are focused solely on the curriculum may end up assigning a project that students do not understand due to a lack of prior knowledge needed to complete the project. Students can pick a part of the curriculum they may already have some background knowledge about to create a project that will help them take an in-depth look at something they will be learning more about ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+255c319cd639,B3388EF1E80C,"Thus, it is possible for students to create a project that addresses important parts of the material they will learn ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dcf3bcc5aa7b,B3388EF1E80C,"Students who are able to design their own projects can create projects they are interested in completing, leading to a more engaging learning experience. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ee6f184eda3d,B3388EF1E80C,"When asked to complete a project they are interested in, students are more likely to complete the assignment and be enthusiastic about what they learn in the process. This elevated engagement presents itself in increased academic achievement, including higher scores on standardized tests, and better retention of material, instead of forgetting it as they continue on their academic path. This level of engagement and the associated benefits is lacking in teacher-designed projects because they do not cater to the interests of the students. These projects miss out on the benefits found in student-designed projects. Thus, while teacher-designed projects may share short-term benefits such as better understanding of the material, they do not maintain the long-term retention necessary for later successes such as boosted standardized test scores. When students design the projects, they are able to create a more engaging experience that leads to better learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c2e1c9f98e20,B3388EF1E80C,"Students are able to incorporate their knowledge and experience into projects they design, whereas teachers might assign one that they are unfamiliar with. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+348a6c5736e2,B3388EF1E80C,"Teachers do not know the experiences of the students they are designing projects for, so they may create one that students struggle applying their real-world knowledge to or one that only focuses on the curriculum instead of ways the learning material can be applied to life outside of school. Students can find creative ways to link what they learn in school to its applications in the real world. This better prepares students for their future lives and careers, where they will be applying what they learned in school instead of being continually tested on it. These students are more prepared for what they will be doing after they finish their education because of this prior experience in applying their knowledge and experience. This also reminds students that there is a world outside of school, creating worldly citizens who are able to apply what they learned to solving problems. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+755aebe1cbee,B3388EF1E80C,"Students can be assured that they will have a project that they can complete when they design their own project, instead of one that may be too challenging or that they might not have the resources to complete. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+31c31b8cb71f,B3388EF1E80C,"Teachers who are unfamiliar with the students and their circumstances may overestimate the students and create a project that is too difficult for students to complete on their own. They might also design a project that students do not have the ability to complete-if a teacher were to assign an essay on what a student learned by traveling, a low-income student may not be able to do it if their family cannot afford to travel. Students are more familiar with their own abilities and resources and can create a project that will provide a good challenge while not being too confusing or difficult. Reaching out for assistance would also be easier, as confused students could reach out to their peers instead of a teacher they do not know. Teachers are prone to creating a project that may be difficult or impossible to students they are unfamiliar with, but students are able to design ones based on their own abilities and resources. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a7a1c0be6f1a,B3388EF1E80C,"Students should design summer learning projects because they can create more interesting ways to learn, they can design ways to incorporate their real-world experiences to the academic curriculum, and they can make a project that will not be too difficult for them to complete over summer break. Students can design more engaging projects based on their interests that will ultimately increase benefits such as higher standardized tests scores and retention of material. Their ability to design projects that incorporate the curriculum into the real world will better prepare them for life and work after they complete their education. In school districts where summer projects are used, parents should advocate for student-designed projects to better their children's education. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d8a2d68c7c4e,B371C925A2B2,I think that using the techonogy to read student emotional expression of student in a class is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f00bcace4f7,B371C925A2B2,because it help to see if a student is happy/mad/sad ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6b25e42b7d3,B371C925A2B2,"Like in the passage it's talking about how they are using this new technology call ''The Facial Action coding system ''Which mean -a system enables computers to identify human emotions . They are aslo using the 3-D computer model of the face ,As they can aslo calculate the emotions . As because you can see what is wrong with your friend/family . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cc77c962325,B371C925A2B2,One reason why I think it's valuable for technology to read your emontional expressoion on studnets is by the promgram ''Facial Action Coding System'' why because just by using a video as it sates in the passage 4 ''using video imagery the new eemotion recognition software tracks these facial movements ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe03e89cb698,B371C925A2B2,''they can see what kind of emontion you have and for them to help you out I am guessing or at less it can be valube for making them feel better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0be32ddd215,B371C925A2B2,Also because is the system is what emotions that person has it can let other people know and just to keep an eye on them .I feel like it will work on other person as well it will help me out because sometimes my mom/daad get a serious face and I don't know if they are happy or sad . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cce9946b81b3,B371C925A2B2,It aslo can be valuable for student's in school because in that way you can help them out to feel better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4cba78aa2d6,B371C925A2B2,sometines you just don't know wehn that person is feeling happy or sad as it states in the passage 5 ''You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her/his face '' and the new technology can help you read their emotions the way they are feeling .Another reason why it can help on students with the new technolongy by the imagine as it states in passage 6 and just by the imagine the computer will know when you are happy or sad .This can help us by helping them out and for them not to feel that way becasue sometimes when student's get mad they do thing they know should't do but all that sadness or anger can take them over by casuing harm .As it will be nice to stop the harm from someone doing it. Another example is this Wed ad as stated in the passage 6 as well now this wed can see your other emotions as an example .''If you smile when a wed ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow .But if you frown the next ad will be different ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+912603e9dc24,B371C925A2B2,A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confused or bored '' As Dr. Hiangs predicts then he could modity thr lesson because they want the student's to pay attion in the classroom for them to learn and not make the class boring or for student to get lost and never asking question but as that to then the teacher will know what makes them get bored and what makes them get fouces ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afca6af2c4ec,B371C925A2B2,This will help for many toher student in school by not causing hram if they mad and aslo by helping student not get bored or lose fouces ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8780330838a1,B371C925A2B2,Now on my personal life I will say that the technolngy will help me by seeing how are people feeling ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eacbe6ace8a6,B371C925A2B2,"when I see them walking around with there face down or just seeing them happy .Like for example lets say that I am walking around the hall way and see my freind wih a serious face or just them not talking to I will like to use the technolgy and see what is wrong with them and try to help them out with the feeling they have and just try to change their mood .Another reason why I will like to help is by seeing how does my mom feel when she looks at me like just take a picture of her and see what are the emotion she has or as in passage say in 7 an ''encode ''different emotions like make her look at her self in the mirror and follow the steps it say and see what are the emotion she has. But yes the technology ''The Facial expressio for each emotion are universal ''because it can help out in many awlays 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76e2b08599fb,B371C925A2B2,As you see I do valuable the technology to read the emotional expressions of student in a class because it can help in many way to see the way they are feeling in there emotion and in there way of learing .Just like Dr. Huang he doesnt want his student to lose fouces and doesnt want them to feel sad either .Just like it will help in school for the student's .Also as using the 3-D computer mood just by seeing an imagine it can see what kind of feeling you are having . As yes it will be value to use later in ,life well it will help me with my friends and even my own kids and students at schools .    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,
+c1cecf597bed,B37E64E1BE1E,"For me I'm not okay by techonology called the Facial Action System because that can't tell that you can describe people's emotion, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8f5a2c3a3166,B37E64E1BE1E,"For me i think we're the only one and are family who can tell what's are emotion we can't also tell what's other's people emotions and also if you really don't know that person you can't really say or red what's their emotions. Like example even we smile in front of people that doesn't express that we're really happy etc because sometimes people smile because they don't want to see other people's worrying for them so they're just choosing to smile in front of them. Like me sometime's if im with other people even l'm sad or angry, l don't what to show what's my real emotion because l'm just choosing to smile in front of them because i don't want them to worry about my emotion or something. The only people who can read or tell what's are emotion is no other than are parents because they know us better than other people. We been on their tummy for nine months so they are the only one who can really read or tell what are emotion. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+966a301088c1,B37E64E1BE1E,"""While looking in the mirror "" By looking in the mirror can't really explain or say what's are emotion are becuase mirror don't speak and it doens't tell your emotions. People use mirro just becuase they want to see what's on their face or if it's dirty or what, how they look before they go somewhere. Mirror just copying what were doing in front of the mirror like if you start talking ofcorse your twin face in the mirror also gonna start talking too,becuase mirror is just a piece of a glass that can't describe what's people's emotion. Mirror can copy what were doing but can't say what are emotion or feeling. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5450781ff454,B37E64E1BE1E,"""Dr. Huang predict that it could be modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+32d73d646965,B37E64E1BE1E,"The same technology can amke computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery because of of human is nonverbal, including emotional communication. Dr. Huang said computer should understand that too becuase its really hard and different. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f5ea88f0511,B4025ED10B7E,Imagine if you saw a face on another planet what would you think? NASA saw one and thought it was a mesa others thought otherwise. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6d4d90e8b7bc,B4025ED10B7E,I think it is a mesa on the red planet. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2032696acfd9,B4025ED10B7E,In 1976 Viking 1 took a photo of formations on mars. The picture looked like a face so the people of the world thought oh my god. Aliens invaded mars and they will invade us run ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+4c107bf164c2,B4025ED10B7E,But NASA kept saying other wise. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2308303cbe2d,B4025ED10B7E,But two decades later (give or take two years) another picture was taken and to more and more people thought it was a face. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d57bf68a69f8,B4025ED10B7E,No matter NASA tried to say it was rock formations but no one lisitened. No one lisitened to NASA because the conspirasicy theorisits of the world were feeding the fire way too much. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab18591632b7,B4025ED10B7E,"Then three years later
+
+NASA relased another picture of the ""face"" but captioned ""huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d308caf9096,B4025ED10B7E,"Now no one thought anything of the ""face"" everyone but the consipary theorists said it was a cover story but science won the day. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e4a02c4faf6,B4025ED10B7E,But i think it is just a mesa formed by astroids. If this keeps happening every time NASA relases a picture i think were in trouble. Well you herd my thoughts what are your thoughts.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+236e2bd4baf5,B40DD5822E7E,Not everyone likes to be in extracurricular activities or have or have to stay after school. Sometimes it can be tiring and it can put a lot of stress on you. That can really be hard on you as a kid ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6d1896d57458,B40DD5822E7E,I am here to tell you why we shouldn't have to be in extracurricular activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+215cb420a8af,B40DD5822E7E,One would be that other kids might have things they have to do after school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ad100afcd42,B40DD5822E7E,like dance practice or softball practice etc. so that would make it hard for them to be at both or have a miss one of their practices. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a22635f5fd79,B40DD5822E7E,Two maybe some students just don't want to do extra stuff for school maybe after a long day at school they just wanna go home and relax or watch TV. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d680fdbe38e4,B40DD5822E7E,Another one could be that they just don't find it appealing and they can start lacking in it and not helping out in anyway. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+36f7923864f1,B40DD5822E7E,Some other ones would be that some students will do it just to act up in that class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30f695556b4e,B40DD5822E7E,I have seen people that has caused so much harm to a class or a sport because someone made them do it and they really don't want to be there. If I was the teacher personally I wouldn't want a student on my team or in my class that it there just to act up ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c06516bd13d,B40DD5822E7E,some kids will do it because their friends are doing it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80c821dc450d,B40DD5822E7E,"You all want kids that are going to do it because they want to not because they see their friends doing it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95be0f8cf0bc,B40DD5822E7E,Others might be that they could be doing just to waste your time ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ddd4876a328d,B40DD5822E7E,Personally if I want to do something I'm gonna do it but I'm not gonna waste your time but other kids don't ever think about that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4e39ec6bb0ed,B40DD5822E7E,Another one would be that they might not be doing it for the right reason. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f26d6638a075,B40DD5822E7E,"Most people that I have seen have got into something just to say that they are in not because they want to help they, just want to make their self look good and thats not OK. We can't always force someone to do something they dont want to do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+297fe79e1cc2,B40DD5822E7E,I honestly disagree with this decision because there could be a kid or a select group of kids that like to start fights or want to harm other students. I wouldn't want to work in that type of environment where I'm scared to even ask a question. You all should let the students decide for themselves what they want to do. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9fab210f31d3,B437EB073109,"hey guys this is tyler, i'm a reporter, ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bd592bf9578c,B437EB073109,today i'm going to give you three reasons why it's a challenge to explore venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+91dfd855229b,B437EB073109,my first reason is because venus is a very very hot plant ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3aa29fa50b5b,B437EB073109,"if you so much as enter the plant, the atmosphere it will crush you do to the tempature and the extreme conditions on the plant. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd527b7797b1,B437EB073109,- my second reason it has been claimed that it is more dangerous to see up close. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cfaef7b0ec7,B437EB073109,"it's the second planet away from the sun but it is also considered our planet, earth's, ""twin"" among other things the reason why it's considered our second planet is for density and size also distance. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84cde40cee4a,B437EB073109,it's thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus for a even more challenge the clouds have a high corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. the pressure is 90 times greater than what we exprience on our own planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37962ee67855,B437EB073109,the conditions are far more extreme than anything humans can encounter on earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3b118487518,B43F583ECE54,"Soccer, student council, and debate are all examples of extra curricular activities that will benefit students greatly in their future. You learn many life lessons while playing a sport, communicating with others, and debating. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d257b115540b,B43F583ECE54,Being exposed to this type of activity from a young age will ensure your success in later years. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6e6348215c86,B43F583ECE54,"Playing a sport teaches you resilience, and how to work with a team. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b44652cfa7a8,B43F583ECE54,"Loosing a sports game does not feel good but its something every one has experienced. Although not everyone knows how to handle losing. When you are taught from a young age how to be resilient and bounce back from a lose, it will be much easier to handle those losses as an adult. Playing a sport also requires team work, you have to work with your team to score a goal. Learning how to communicate with your team mates is very similar to communication in the work place. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+340cf0c7a3ad,B43F583ECE54,Being on the student council is all about communicating with your peers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+73b4b6d1854d,B43F583ECE54,"If this communicating is not done properly or clearly it will be very hard to get work done. When you get a job as an adult clear communication will be mandatory. If you do not communicate properly, someone could end up doing something differently then you intended. In student council, students will learn how to communicate with their peers. By doing this, communication as adults will be much easier. Even in disagreements your communication will be essential. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37df87ce9cdc,B43F583ECE54,Debate teaches students how to argue respectfully while still getting your point across. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ac0063a77740,B43F583ECE54,"You will encounter many arguments in your life so knowing a way to argue with out hurting anyone is a curtail life lesson. Arguments between friends, and families are very common, but these are people you love and always want by your side. Knowing how to argue kindly and not escalating to a fight is very important. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e5c5a55f0eb,B43F583ECE54,"School offering a variety of mandatory extracurricular actives is a great idea. This way students can learn important life lessons while doing something they enjoy. These actives teach children important lessons from knowing how to handle losing, communication with others, and even how to respectfully settle an argument. Being exposed to this type of activity from a young age will ensure great success in later years of life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ed1f22a6410c,B45B48157399,"Schools should use facial action coding system because its use full for school. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+c018afc2ef7d,B45B48157399,One reason why schools should use facial action coding system because it can be use full for health classes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bada7fe8a613,B45B48157399,health classes effect how much your emotions affect your body for example if you're always depressed you'll have a chance that your body might suffer from something and you might have a hard time to bring your body to stay strong again after suffering from depression and if your always happy you won't have a problem. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+526b3f31fb03,B45B48157399,My Second reason why schools should use facial action coding because a day on a test. A day on a test you'll have a emotion that you don't wanna take it or just too lazy to do the test ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4abdfa86a782,B45B48157399,"might end up the person guessing all the problems and not even caring. The next day they would see there scores in the test and be embarassed because they got there score low. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a26f6c3ed2d,B45B48157399,My Third reason why schools should use facial action coding because incase of a fight. People might be angry and might take there anger away on someone else ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5270de464117,B45B48157399,it could manage to start a fight that's why you can check on them and ask why are they angry and calm them down. You never know if that could happen so always be prepared. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12c64d9959e0,B460B20EE678,"What is the closest planet to Earth? The Evening Star give us the brightest light. The closest planet to Earth is Venus. As human studies, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Humans study more and more about Venus everyday. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b352cdc4ea3d,B460B20EE678,The Evening Star give us the brightest light because it's too close to the Earth. Venus has more power of light than other planet. Mercury is closer to the sun but Venus can get more power than Mercury. Venus has has more power to gets the hotness. Venus is vantage point of Earth. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7fa781669713,B460B20EE678,"The author says, ""Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely,"" (paragraph 1). ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f957f9a20584,B460B20EE678,"
+As human studies, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. As humans study, Venus's atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our town. When Venus has low power of hotness, the weather on Earth has changed. The author said, ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus,"" (paragraph 3). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c0edb36743e,B460B20EE678,"Today, solar systems are useful on Earth. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4176e7eb665a,B460B20EE678,"Today, we're using computers, cell phone or tablat with solar. The author says, ""By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces,"" (paragraph 7). Humans are still working on Venus to get more powers, even though we got lots of power from Venus already. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7fe64080e1ca,B460B20EE678,"Humans didn't want Venus's power at first because it's too hot and now, they want it because it's safe. In the paragraph 8, the last line, it said ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation"". ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+535f91c09c06,B471DC1A142D,why should we stop driving cars? ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1b9dcff1b829,B471DC1A142D,cars  take us places way faster than we could be riding bick or walking ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f25aa71c6868,B471DC1A142D,cars cause polltuion ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4ae52273da1f,B471DC1A142D,but we have made more advance cars that run on electricity and it takes where we need to go at the same place and doesnt do harm to the atmo sphere. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cf5e992aa8c9,B471DC1A142D,"if a reallybad accidnent happen and a hospital was too far away how are we goona help them if we cant find a way to get to one as quicly as possible. cars are one of the best transportation devices so why would you try to get rid of them even if they just cause a little daamge to the earth it really isnt that bad. we really need cars for a whole bunch of things like going to any of your families houses that live  and going to a road trip that might be a couple of hours away , so imagine if you didnt have a car, how would you be able to do any of those with out one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e8a1b53c6c3,B471DC1A142D,if we didnt have cars to use you wouldnt car sales men and gasoline stations and car repair companies and car was businessesnlose alot of money and make them unemployed ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd60a26fb0b7,B471DC1A142D,and it would be hard for them to look for a job in the disasterous economy of ours and it would make it worse than it already is ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b1bd95a7a03,B471DC1A142D,honestly to me i think this is outrageous for us to do that. there is no way that we can all just driving cars either we just have to find a better way to fuel up the car without hurtung the enviorment. and when that one day come we would stop this worldwide problem. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+56dec579cb8f,B4C4BABFB290,"Recently the principle made a big change to our school. He decided that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity. After I heard about this, I started thinking of how this can impact our school. Some students might disagree with this new change, but I actually agree with the principle's decision. There might be some minor ways on how this can effect students, however, I think this could be a great way to improve students mental health. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2e30c25c9acd,B4C4BABFB290,Students should at least participate in one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8a8a95c63e97,B4C4BABFB290,"this could make students more productive, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb65b7164a38,B4C4BABFB290,"help students find something they might be passionate in, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1685fcc7e007,B4C4BABFB290,have a great way to make new friends. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f7840b0109a4,B4C4BABFB290,"There are many students who can get lazy when they come home from school. Most of the time, I can be one of those students. Usually when I come home after school, I always get the urge to jump on my bed and just watch videos on my phone. When I get on my phone, I can get so invested in it, that I don't even realize I have a lot of homework assignments to do.
+
+Being lazy is just unhealthy for your body and mental health. Most students probably have been in the same situation as me. Although, if those students were to be in a extracurricular activity, they would be more productive. For example, an activity like playing soccer can help someone's brain/and body to be more active. Another example would be participating in any art-related activity, which can help students think more creatively. Doing any extracurricular activity would be way better than to sit down and watch on a device. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22c78180cf1d,B4C4BABFB290,"There are some students who might not have any activity or hobby they're passionate in. If those students had to take an extracurricular activity, they would have a more chance of finding something they like. Some students might even end up liking an activity they never thought they would. Every school gives many options in extracurricular activities. If a student tries out an activity and they don't like it, they can always try a different one. Also, another benefit in finding a activity you like, is getting a lead to a career you might want to have in the future. It's always good to know what you're passionate in, so you can have more options for future careers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfaa4e323e1f,B4C4BABFB290,"Socializing and making friends is important for anyone's mental health. Friends can be supporting and a helping hand at any time. The friends you make can also build a strong character in you. If you join an extracurricular activity that you really like, it can be easier to make friends because they will have the same interest as you. Because of the similar interests, the friends you make through an activity can be more closer than the friends you make in class. Making friends gets you to know other people in your school, and it's better to know more people so you can feel more comfortable at school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+641ccf659bd6,B4C4BABFB290,"There may be other ways that extracurricular activities can benefit students, but the reasons I thought of were the most important to me. With extracurricular activities students can be more productive, find an activity they might be passionate in, and make new friends. Also, extracurricular activities can play a important role in life by leading you to a career. For the students who don't agree in partaking in any activity, just keep in mind that It's always better to try new activities because you might end up liking it!  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+acbf3174cdde,B4CB3063482A,"What would you do if you saw what NASA saw on Mars in 1976? In 1976,
+
+NASA’s Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars, snapping photos of a possible landing site for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. Eventully, scientists figured out that it was possibly just another Martian mesa. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ae215caf3549,B4CB3063482A,"A few days later NASA revealed the image for everyone to see. The caption said a “huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.” ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e90dc5d865b,B4CB3063482A,This said that the formation wasn't a human head but just a oddly shaped land form. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd8a4b7beeb3,B4CB3063482A,"However, some people think that this could be an actule human life form on Mars ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+5c3a63e8b244,B4CB3063482A,"But, When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, they saw that it was just a natural land form. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c6c47b670f11,B4CB3063482A,"The Face on Mars formed to be a natural land form, so scientists told the people that there was no alien life form and that they were safe from harm. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0c16002424a7,B4FD96336393,In this story the author is trying to claim that venus is worthy of to explore even tho venus is dangerous ,Position,Adequate,,,
+67fbf22e44dd,B4FD96336393,"and it very close to earth venus is the second planet from the sun its safe enough .
+
+venus is 800 degrees fahrenheit its the hottest surface temputure of any planet in our solar system venus is largely coverd with oceans and rocky sediment it includes familiar . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+088758f8bfa8,B4FD96336393,feature that venus can sometimes be an option venus is slowly hovering safely far abover the planet . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69024a7e5408,B4FD96336393,venus has value not only beacuse its insight to be gained on the planet by itself humans will be curious enough to go check out venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92c1d29902bf,B4FD96336393,our earth should not be limted beacuse venus can be dangerius annd have doubts but we should expand and to meet imagination and innovation the author thinks that we should explore venus beacuse we could find something great . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a944550a89a2,B4FD96336393,venus is a great planet to explore we just have to be curious enough to explore it .and if you want to explore venus make sure u brings lots of water and food and bring something to cool you down. Nasa is working on the dangerous of venus so we have to read more about it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cf066de1e091,B5113469D13C,"The unmasked face of mars had remained a mystery to others, so researchers have been trying to uncover what the face of Mars actually meant ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+61416a0d6efe,B5113469D13C,"Some say that aliens made it, but others said that it is a landform ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+840ce4b96982,B5113469D13C,"When NASA discovered a shadowy likeness that almost resembled a face, Mars made or evelated a new Landform that resembled a face. The face of Mars may have been popular, but everone in the world was oblivious, yet so indesicive about what Mars really showed other than a face. Conspiracy theorists have no proof that Alien life form existed in Mars. ""We felt this was important to taxpayers."" No alien mounument is proven but a new landform spouted into place which resembled a face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76aa3946e04f,B5113469D13C,Not every researcher or anyone was satisfied ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ee3fb9722c7,B5113469D13C,"the face of Mars has been proven either a mystery or scientists are still researching about how the landform looked like a face. Never the less, after a few years later, Malin's team shot a photo that was extraordinary using the maximum resolution. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8040cb893506,B5113469D13C,"The pixels showed clear hard proof, in the one 2001 image spans that are 1.56 meters,and compared 43 meters per pixel in the best and original 11976 photo ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a56309b1ed4d,B5113469D13C,Not everyone can agree that the face of Mars is just a landform or alien life, thus the face or landform still remained as an anonomys fact of mystery. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,
+a93f6ccf2ae9,B51E027B51AF,In 1976 Viking 1 snapped a photo of Mars. Viking 1 spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. Many people think it was created by the life on Mars. Many people think that it is just a natural landform. There was no alien creation after all. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+aea34c4b77ea,B51E027B51AF,"this is just a natural landform created on Mars. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+8392756b4c0b,B51E027B51AF,"First, Michael Malin and his MOC took a picture of the ""face"" and claimed it to be just a natural landform. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+470d53074e67,B51E027B51AF,"The picture was more clear than the orginal 1976 photograph. When NASA got a good shot at the ""face"" they rused out there to the Red planet to get a good shot. Jim Garvin said, ""We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a god shot at it."" And it was revealed that it is a natural landmark. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48692ae47c28,B51E027B51AF,"On April 8th, 2001 Cydonia became cloudless. And it was easy for NASA to see the mysterious face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87b61055fb0c,B51E027B51AF,"NASA took a picture ""3 times bigger than the pixel size."" So if there was an object like a airplane on the surface of Mars, you would be able to see what the object was. Turns out that the picture showed a butte or mesa. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90e448140cf7,B51E027B51AF,"""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho,"" says Garvin. The mysterious face turned out to be a butte. Not a Alien artifact. Each pixel in the 2001 photo spans 1.56 meters. compared to 43 meters per pixel in the Viking 1 photo. ""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars,"" said Garvin. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abf95d3592e6,B51E027B51AF,NASA is apart of the Government. The Government lies all the time. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+42118f2f2e74,B51E027B51AF,"So that kinda makes people think that NASA is lying about the ""Face"" being a natural landmark. The Government and NASA are keeping secrets in Area 51. So they must be keeping this whole ""Face"" thing secret too. That it's not a butte or a mesa. But that it was created by life on Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6164b316ac0c,B51E027B51AF,"In conclusion, NASA still hasn't prooved that there is life in Space. But does this ""Face"" landmark proove that there is? We just have to wait and find out. This is a story that has been going around for decades. And it is still unsolved. NASA recently found ice caps on other planets. And claimed that there was water on Mars but it evaporated, casusing the huge valleys and canyons on Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d2e24a44b76d,B57C860BE032,I will be trying to convince the population to beleive that the face's on Mars are natural landforms. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d484dd8b2f43,B57C860BE032,"Now i will be talking about face one. this face is there in 1976. To my personal vision the face is still sorte of developing, or the picture is really blury. Although it's developing or blury you can still seea face. NASA claim's for it to look or be visualized as a viking. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90e455ded6c8,B57C860BE032,These face's do look like natural landforf's. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39f1e9e91412,B57C860BE032,They look like wind or a storm formed them. In face one it look's like there is alot of wind when NASA took the picture. In face two it kinda revels a little more . What im thinking is there had to have been a storm or strong wind for face one to be so blury. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57daedf81efa,B57C860BE032,These face's seem as if they had alot of time to form. Can that mean there natural. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5a3b4f472678,B57C860BE032,Think about this if these structure's were man made or alein made they wouldn't look like this ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bf934b170145,B57C860BE032,so what is that telling us. Another reason is if it was man made it would be much smaller. These faces have to be natural landforms. Also to my understanding NASA has been watching the faces for a while. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b004ce2cb95d,B57C860BE032,Then in picture three it is just totaly blown over. It seem's as if wind just keept blowing over then time and time agian. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43420378f18e,B57C860BE032,"If it was man made this would not have happend they would have kept it clean. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a1595a57895d,B57C860BE032,Although this is my oppinion many other's agree with what im am trying to argue. I also agree that these are natural land form's and are soon going to be wiped away. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3c8ac41920ee,B5A5CFDCE29E,Some schools require students to complete projects to assure they continue learning during break. Should these projects be teacher-designed or student-designed? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d284d8152d8c,B5A5CFDCE29E,I think these projects should be teacher-designed because in my opinion it would be better and it would actually help them more. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d57c98b8d93f,B5A5CFDCE29E,"By the teacher designing it, it means she/he is giving them the information on what they should be working on. By them giving the information students can or will find it easy to do and finish them fast so they can have the rest of the summer for them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20622006e396,B5A5CFDCE29E,Summer projects designed by teachers in my opinion it would help students to learn more and not forget what they have learned about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db2a40b8226b,B5A5CFDCE29E,"Teachers who designed these projects should give each student to work on a target they have struggle with or did not understand. Teachers should designed summer projects that could be work with other people, they should make it fun. Summer projects should be fun but yet the students can still be learning. Projects do not have to be boring all the time. They should make it about getting up,doing some movements. When students are doing these projects they should be walking, running, laughing, talking, and working with one another. If teachers make these summer projects boring students may want to do them. Is also their summer where they have fun, where they go to vacations with their families, where they go to the pool, the beach. Summer is basically their free time, their free month, no school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7533acac41a8,B5A5CFDCE29E,By assigning these projects to students is going to help them to not forget the information they learned about and also to learn new information. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96e527b46fd8,B5A5CFDCE29E,"For example, when I go to summer break or any other break and come back to school after that break or whatever break it would be I would and still not remember a thing, all the information I learned about would be gone yeah there used to be some stuff that I still will remember but most of it will be gone. In math class we would start a target; when the teacher would be teaching us a target she will be like ""You guys should know this information already from last year"". In my head I would be like ""uhhhh.. no,no,no ma'am I do not remember this; how was I going to remember this!"". I would honestly not like having work over the summer because for me summer should be school free and homework free, eventhough; I think is really helpful but I do not think is for me. If I ever get to do something like that I think I would do it but if it brings something fun for example, the ones that do most projects could win something, they should make it exciting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9de6ee0e0919,B5A5CFDCE29E,"Summer projects, yes absolutely they can be really helpful. These projects can help students a lot. These projects can help students by remembering things they have learned about, also by learning and gathering new information in their heads. By making these projects fun of course students would love to do them. Teachers do not give students something boring to learn about because they are not going to do it. By making it boring students would get bored fast. So teachers make these summer projects fun. I really think these projects would be more helpful being teacher-designed.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+22b15319884a,B5CA9C10711C,"As the end of the school year approaches, I began to grow with excitement. Finally, I have a break from the stressful school work. However, as I thought I would be free from the chains, I am held back once again as teachers began to assign tedious summer project. Tired and with my strong desires of a break, I waited till the last couple weeks of summer before starting on the time consuming project. Recently, an argument has risen about whether summer projects should be student deigned or teacher designed. People who believe that the projects should be student designed may argue that student designed projects would increase the percentage of participation on these projects. Others, who believed that it should be teacher designed, argue back that the knowledge teachers have on the curriculum allows the projects to be truly designed for its main intention ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3d8fba08695f,B5CA9C10711C,Teachers should be designing these summer project ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ff71a54bfb8b,B5CA9C10711C,their knowledge of the future curriculum ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a23f5a0c4a77,B5CA9C10711C,their understanding of the mindset of students ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2ecc14f6eff8,B5CA9C10711C,"Teachers are well equipped with the knowledge of the future curriculum, thus they have the ability to adjust their lesson plans to help assist their students for the upcoming years. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+16b5d8c31cda,B5CA9C10711C,"Seen by many students, lessons or skills learned in the previous school year are used in the present school year. For example, math facts, such as addition and subtraction, are constantly being referred to in all math courses. Acknowledging this reality, teachers would try to shift their lesson plans around for the purpose of trying to strengthen their students ability to understand such skills. Similar theory is applied to the designing of summer projects. Teachers, with the knowledge of what is expected in the next couple courses of a students life, would be able to shape projects into helping the students prepare for the upcoming school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b9d04b3efb5a,B5CA9C10711C,"People who believed that the summer projects should be student designed may argue that student designed projects will encourage for more participation, due to the fact that these projects will have a more simple design and be more easier to understand. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fe14e12be5fd,B5CA9C10711C,"However, lowering the difficulty of a project doesn't cause a dramatic shift in student participation. As seen in several classrooms, in regards to homework, regardless of the difficulty in the assignment, many student willingly choose to not complete their assignment. Therefore, attendance or participation is an irrelevant factor when designing these projects. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b3b88d28bbdb,B5CA9C10711C,"Having a easier summer project not only doesn't shift the percentage of participation, but also causes a strain in the development or knowledge of the student over the summer. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dbdf572fdfb7,B5CA9C10711C,"Almost all teachers have witnessed students who refuse to complete homework, thus, they understand that lowering the difficulty would not change participation. This observation causes the teachers to not design the projects in favor of student's emotions, but rather design the projects according to the theory of helping their students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a50f23ed2d1,B5CA9C10711C,"Summer projects should be designed by teachers because teachers have understanding about future curriculum and understanding about the actions of a typical student. One of the main goals of a teacher is to assist students or help students succeed in life. Therefore, logically, everything a teacher does is to benefit the students. Teachers, unbiased about the emotions of a student, will challenge their students into achieving high goals. In their best efforts, teachers would try to assist their students in trying to acquire beneficial skills. Teachers understand that some students will try to challenge authority by refusing to complete assignment, instead of signing in defeat, they will persistent in their teaching methods because they understand that defeat wouldn't help the student. Thus, teachers should have the opportunity to design summer projects because they are guaranteed to have design projects that benefit students. Many successful businessmen, doctors, or scientists, credit their success to teachers. The profession of teachers have existed for many generations and have been known as the source of many successful people's success. Therefore, their ability to create a summer project should not be questioned.                  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bea5ee445d8f,B5D9F34D2CAC,Have you ever wondered what it is like in Venus and how we might be able to study more about it. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+06ef29f573a7,B5D9F34D2CAC,Studying Venus closely is worth the risk for more information on Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+314dcf9f5975,B5D9F34D2CAC,With the information it could lead scientists into making better technology to explore mars or other planets. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+571c2c4f1617,B5D9F34D2CAC,The exploration could also be our backup Earth if the current Earth in inhabitable ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a2e69548276,B5D9F34D2CAC,With all the risk it may not be possible to explore Venus but if you are determined to find the answers then it could be possible. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa11817e74b5,B5D9F34D2CAC,There would be all sorts of information if we studied Venus closely. There are a lot of problems but it is still possible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a29e88607fc,B5D9F34D2CAC,"There are a lot of people that wants to know more about Venus. For example on paragraph 4 it states that, ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system."" This is stating that Astronomers know that one day Venus will change and humans will be soon able to land on it without much difficulties. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+256ed50b9c3f,B5D9F34D2CAC,The information just from Venus could even help us explore other planets and solar systems far from our solar system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a94cbb6921d9,B5D9F34D2CAC,"With the information we could possibly find another earth-like planet faster or easier. On paragraph 8 it states, ""...but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."" This quote is stating that our curiousty will soon take us over and eventually humans will do anything to findout more about Venus or anything in general. I believe that someday we will be able to find the truth about Venus and more information or data that can help us with exploring other planets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d3d39e5dcdde,B5D9F34D2CAC,All of us have thought of what will happen if the current Earth we live on is destroy or inhabitable. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf4f97605998,B5D9F34D2CAC,"Well our 2 options are either Mars or Venus, if we knew more of the planet Venus and how it behaves. On paragraph 4 it says that, "" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+489e54f42c1e,B5D9F34D2CAC,This is stating that Venus could return or we can make it return to how it was originally and possibly live on it. This is a good reason I think Venus will be able to accept humans and find more facts and informations. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b52a6ae683e,B5D9F34D2CAC,In conclusion we have wondered how things are in Venus. We even wanted to know what would happen to humans if they went to Venus. There would be lots of information if we visited and came back perfectly. With all those information we got from visiting Venus it could help us with other difficulties from different planets. The Venus we know as of right now could be different as we learn more about it and find a way to change it closley to Earth. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+345b842f7608,B5DBDEBA4B23,"no matter how hard we try we will never change, this world is dieing and we are the once doing it. no the animals not the earth not the cars, us the human rase is killing the plant, we are the biggest pradusers of polution, we drive the cars we burn fosal fuals we are the ones killing our world. when th time comes the human rase is going to have to find a new place to livve beacase the world is going to be so toxsic that no living thing will be abal to survive on earth. the ones that will be blamd will be us and if we kill this planet it is oonly right that the human rase dies with it.
+
+right now the world is changing there are people that think its no big deal and others that think its the end of the world. i realy dont know what to thinnk. its in human nature to be selfish and only worry about ourselfs so yaeh we dont evan care oubout ourself as a group or futer generations evan wild animals know the importants of pasing on futer genes. wild animals clearly under stand what we humans seem to always forget, we are all going to one day die. we wont be here forever and as a seseas we need to worry about our futere generations and were will thay live and how will they sevive.
+
+we all love the time when we are teens and the big highlight of that time in our lives is that we start to drive. we are evan more exited if we get a new car, a teen going to the car dealership is like a kid at the candy store. differant colers differant sizes differant styales. they make it so everyone who is anyone has a new shiny car. so what do we do ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3fcac79bc468,B5DBDEBA4B23,"if everyone has a new car if every one one the planet has a new car and is always driving, we have better get to bying gas masks ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bd39061b2869,B5DBDEBA4B23,the air will be so poluted so toxic that it will be imposibul to breath ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a999ec987d37,B5DBDEBA4B23,"we are kiling ourselfs and we are ignoring that fact if we dont change then we are all done for.
+
+at the end of the day if we as a speesies dont change we are never going too help this world survive. we need to open ou eyes to what we are doing and not to sound like the preacher, see the arre of our ways. if we dont do that futer generations will never make it, us as a speaseas will not survive. we need to stop fooling around and get serious we arnt kids anymore. me us we you need to change but hey no one ever read this anyway.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+626831759d94,B60AC5648815,"I think it will be boring becuase you would be to that same place many times. Plus you would see nothing but water. Most likley the boat will smell like a barn full of anamils. Then you would also have to lift all that straw and bags of oat around the boat. You would have to clean up after them. I have 2 cats and I have to clean up after them and lift the bags of cat food. Boy let me you it is a hard job. But the worse part of taking care of my cats is when they get sick all over the floor.
+
+So I dont really see why taking care of 100 some horses would be fun. unless you like horses. Then you would be working on the boat durring a war. that would be dangeras. Plus you would never be home to see your familay unless they came with you. But that probly wouldnt be allowed.
+
+What if you get sea sick? Or a horse gets sick and spreds it around to the other horses? What if the boat springs a leak? A lot of lives will be at risk. Plus what if an animal that you are alergic to comes on the ship? What if the engine breaks and you cant move? Or you run out of food? What would you do? or if the lights quit working while your in the fog or its nigh, and your right in the middle of an ice berg feild? that would be a very rogh time. Or if some one needs medical attention what would you do? or if the caption got sickand it spreded around to the other crew members?
+
+that would be a verytough time. Plus there would be noone to feed the horses becus evrey one would be to weak. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f5a040e880c9,B60AC5648815,I sure wouldnt Want a job like that!!!!!!!!!        ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fd9a1004409a,B64326635AB6,Scientists wants to keep on exploring venus even tho it is dangerous. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+83bc29ba551f,B64326635AB6,One reason I think they should is because they should get information about things they brealy know about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c7f6b7364e8,B64326635AB6,My second reason is because they might find someuseful things if they keep on studing it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f8c4345fa977,B64326635AB6,My last reason is because it might not be as dangerous as people make it out to be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15097781621c,B64326635AB6,scientist should keep studing venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+200f69a1ea72,B64326635AB6,In conclusion I do think its a good idea for people to keep studing venus. My first reason was because it could give the scientist more information on the plant. My second reason was they might find some useful information that coild help them. My last reason was venus might not be a dangerous place as people make it out to be. So i think this is why some scientist should study venus more. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ae3aeb62f384,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"Many schools offer a variety of extracurricular activities that students can participate in. Although many students are recognized for all of the activities they do, some of their fellow students do not participate in any. There are many excuses children and teens come up with as to why they can't participate, but there are a couple logical reasons that support their case. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+68bceaa8ed9e,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"If a principal made every student engage in an extracurricular activity, I would disagree. I do not think students should be forced to do certain activities ",Position,Effective,,,
+7e0fc7d64e05,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"they may not have the money to participate, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f998f2bb3338,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"they may be shy and performing in a sport or club is out of their comfort zone, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0011183ca5fd,B6B2D2FC8F3D,they may not have enough time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cb435ab0cc8f,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"If you are involved in sports there are many expenses that come with the honor. You have to buy the right shoes and clothes to practice in, but that's not all. Getting training lessons for the activity can be very expensive and a hard task to achieve. Also, their parents might want to use the money for other things that are important to them like a family vacation, or eating out. Lastly, they may be participating in an activity out of school that is expensive, and having to pay for both a school activity, and after school activity can be difficult. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+63fe09001680,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"if it is your first time doing so, it can be very nerve-racking. Many teens know what they would have to experience if they participated, and after thinking about the hardships, they might decide to nothing at all. They may have an older sibling or friend to help them, but many students do not. Having a friend participate in the sport or club with you can be a great advantage, but some teens do not get that advantage. So forcing them to participate in an activity where they have no one to talk to during practice or to cheer them on, can make the activity seem boring. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05771e16977b,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"Some parents work late so finding a ride home or getting everything prepared for the activity can be hard. Also, a lot of students work on homework after school, if they played a sport or participated in a club, they may not have enough time to accomplish their studies, which in my opinion is the most important task of all. Students may not manage their time wisely. Finishing homework, participating in an activity, and still having a little free time at the end of the day is a lot to juggle. Without unlimited time on your hands, he or she may feel overwhelmed and stressed, which can lead to bigger problems. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0c3b19be47db,B6B2D2FC8F3D,"although I would respect the principal's ultimate decision, I disagree with her statement. Students should not have to be involved in an extracurricular activity. They should be able to choose if they want to participate in an activity. Ultimately, the students choice should be prioritized, because they know their own strengths, and there are a couple reasons to support my claim. The student may not have the money to do so, it may be out of their comfort zone, and lastly they may not have enough time, and forcing them to participate in an activity would bring stress onto their shoulders.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+01f9064f1d2b,B6B7196E454E,Is Venus worthy pursuiting despite the dangers it presents ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5f1fcc779a2c,B6B7196E454E,I am going to show you both sides why it would be good to go and why it wouldn't be good to go ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1bdb00d90221,B6B7196E454E,Venus is a planet and it is neighbor to earth and is the close planet to earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4bb1a5106bb,B6B7196E454E,It is like eath twin ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7871e5190405,B6B7196E454E,Have you ever wanted to go to other planet to see what it is like? Why don't you go to venus. It is close to earth. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+82b63ec271e3,B6B7196E454E,"In the text it says that ""NASA possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray."" It also says that "" not a single spaceship has toched down on venus in more then three decases. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and no one had ever been there."" You could be the first one to land on Venus. This proves that since it is a dangers planet it would still be worthy seeing it. Now, lets talk about why it wouldn't be worthy seeing it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+28e628d58dbf,B6B7196E454E,Would it really be worth seeing Venus because it had a lot of danger. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+560180bade83,B6B7196E454E,"It says in the text that ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."" It also states that "" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahernheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own plantet."" This proves that it would not be worth going to Venus ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+927dd089981a,B6B7196E454E,Is venus worth going to despite that dangers that it holds. No it is not worth going to. The planet is 800 degrees Fahernheit. You will not survie that long on that planet but it would be cool to go to a planet no one has ever been to though. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+afcb123bfc74,B6F03D0CEABE,"Students know their capabilities. During the summer some schools decide to make teacher give students summer projects, to help keep their mental capabilities up. While students may not like this whole process there has been discussion on whether or not they should be student or teacher designed. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+26cfca72d4ea,B6F03D0CEABE,Teacher may want to have them design them because they think students would make it extremely easy which is fair. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ca642c684ce9,B6F03D0CEABE,I still believe that students should be the ones to design it. ,Position,Effective,,,
+1fb6788e2ad1,B6F03D0CEABE,"they were already given tons by teachers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d7148e906a52,B6F03D0CEABE,they need to be independent ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d5a2ab44d2d1,B6F03D0CEABE,People have to know when to take a break. Students throughout the school year have been taught many things by teachers which we are very grateful for. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+3cc5fdddcc16,B6F03D0CEABE,we have been given hundreds of assignments and projects all made by different teachers. So instead of stressing during the long break they can finish the project at their own pace and even have fun with what they designed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6097449f6081,B6F03D0CEABE,Let them grow up. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+c9089b1a6744,B6F03D0CEABE,"After each year of school is over they go onto the next, and during the summer they should be challenged with a self designed project to help them be more independent. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ddb4dcdca005,B6F03D0CEABE,Teachers are more experienced. With people that think that teachers are the best option for designing the project I do understand why. Students are young and may just want to take the easy route by not putting much effort into it. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6742e99b33e7,B6F03D0CEABE,"While teachers have experience making projects and understand just how hard each component will make it. So using a middle ground will help teachers let their kids be independent. By letting the teachers give students a guideline on what exactly the project should or should not have, will let them feel secure about them finishing it. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+aeba4c0bf94f,B6F03D0CEABE,"The guideline would explain the things needed for it and how it should be graded, and letting students know how it will be graded will help immensely when design it.
+
+It will also help the students to figure out ideas for their design instead of them just being completely out in the open. So making a guild line will make both the teacher and students feel more secure and confident in the project being designed and completed. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2b4bc0ec5f62,B6F03D0CEABE,"Schools have to understand students better. With summer based projects being designed by the students they are able to have some fun doing it while also learning skills that are needed for both in school and out. Doing so helps them learn how to be independent and makes it so teachers will let them as well. So I do think that summer projects should be made by the students, because it helps them to learn independence, know when to take a break, and then let teachers know that they can do it but a little help at the start doesn't hurt.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3881605de519,B709F976724E,Emotion is somthing that show life the feeling that we have ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+acb41bca500e,B709F976724E,Some computer can recognize about the emotion. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+04290f271c35,B709F976724E,"He let his student calculating like math about facial movements human used to express their feeling. This is the 3D computer's face 44 major mucles in this model . Mr Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of Facial Action Coding
+
+System. He has six emotional like happiness, suprise, anger, disguist, fear,and sadness. ""The facial expression for each emotion are universal "" He said with the unsimiling face. ""even though inviduals often show varing degees of expression"". An start the new sofeware to show them how Mona Lisa smile . Dr. Huang used da Vinci sofeware to show the muscle on her smile. The Mona Lisa demonstration to bring smile in her face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+952f0a0c523a,B709F976724E,This computer can know is you happy or sad. If they play video game you fell happy so thee computer know that too ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27caa1be508a,B709F976724E,In my opion show the emotion is very important bacuse it will show the tacher if you understand the lesson or not. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f57f4ea55ca3,B709F976724E,If you show the teacher with the exicting face you show the teacher that you don't understandnd but you show he teacher a couple smile you can make sure that you understand the lesson. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be6a62bc7843,B709F976724E,Use the technology to read student emotion that you can know the student if you don't understand the student or you are new teacher here. Some of student now they have a lot of trouble or sad story they try to hind . They try to be happy in froent of evryone. But at nigh or when they come back home hey will feel sad they cried all day all night. They will be a not social or can't focus on study so if we use that technology it will let the teacher know the feeling of each student. If they have any problem the teacher can help them figure out or help them overcome that feelunng and bring student the possituve feeling. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5afaca1d01b4,B709F976724E,Some of student is they feel very bored or very sad they will have some disease happen about the neron in their hed make them crazy and bring that sad whole life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6984dcd7f6c6,B709F976724E,But we are glad if the people always think everything in the possitive way and they feel happy and love this life but if they are happy a lot maybe the most of peple that they can not feel their heart or who they love. They will be the person don't have any feeloing that not good to. I mean here you should balance you emoji ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+696e6271f8b9,B709F976724E,And the teacher should have that technology to help student ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d34ffb4abd72,B709F976724E,"The student look at the mirror and try to smile so they can see the changing of the smile. Because when to stand in front of the mirror an smile that show every part of that smile so you can see that. However,, simile is come from our emotion if we feel happy or comfortable your smile will come very natural. If you not happy it will show you the smile lip without happy eyebrow . The student feel very excited about this part. The feeling of each of person are very important ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+633a277367d7,B709F976724E,"Nowaday, it's kind of hard to find that technology so i hope that the scientist can make one for the teacher. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd98d56fbff3,B709F976724E,You should open and share your feeling to the other person so they can understand or they can undeersttand you well. If it's hard to share with friends or teacher you can shared with your parent . They have more year to face with a lot of problem more than you maybe thay will have some good solution that can help you fix the problem ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c49d394c6934,B709F976724E,"Finally, the scientist should produce that machine for the teacher to undersand the student or they can share with the teacher or family beacause our feeling is very important , it will make people make good thing and focus more on work. The school should are more about their feeling or if they sad the teacher should open some acitivity or give them a word that make them feel better. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3691efc174f9,B7819FA33B21,Summer assignments should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e38467776962,B7819FA33B21,"students will understand the project better, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fab64ddffb4a,B7819FA33B21,"they will actually want to do it, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bf273ff363ae,B7819FA33B21,it will be a more fun and creative way for the students to learn. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d43158c04c01,B7819FA33B21,"Since it was designed by the students, they will have a better understanding of what needs to be done for the assignment. If it was designed by a teacher, then the students may be confused about the assignment and will ask many questions. Students will also actually want to get it done. Since it was designed by the students, they will feel the need to get it done knowing its not just a burden put on them over the summer by the teacher, forcing them to work. Students will also not be able to use the excuse
+
+""I did not know what to do."" Students will know what to do because it was designed by the students in the first place. This is what leads me to believe that summer assignments should be student designed, because students will have a better understanding of the project since it was created by them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ff1d58e50977,B7819FA33B21,"If the assignment is designed by the students, it will appeal to them and they would take interest in it. If it was designed by a teacher, students will feel as if they have no choice in the matter, and must do as the teacher asks, thus removing the students interest from the assignment. Students will not feel as if they are having their summer taken away from them by the teacher, forcing them to do assignments. Since it was designed by the students, they would understand each other and know how much work would be too much, and what topics would appeal to them. This is why summer assignments should be student designed, because the students will actually want to get it done knowing they aren't being forced to do a project by the teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f4a05e351b9d,B7819FA33B21,"They will enjoy doing the project because it appeals to them. Since it was designed by the students, they will find joy in doing it because it was created by them in the first place and wont feel as if they are being forced to do it by the teacher. Students will also understand that its not just another project designed by the teacher. Instead, its a fun and creative way to let the students have some fun while learning. They will be enthusiastic about the project because they know its not just a huge workload put on them by the teacher to ruin their summer. Students will also be able to ask their friends for help if needed, instead of having to ask the teacher how to do everything. This is why I strongly believe that summer assignments should be student-designed, because it will be a more fun and creative way for the students to learn and it will be more appealing to them. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9e8c1ac188a7,B7819FA33B21,"I strongly believe that summer assignments should be student-designed. This is true because students will understand the assignment better since it was created by them, students will also feel the need to get it done,and lastly, it will be a more fun and creative way for the students the learn.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea93e0b9a692,B78889CD7103,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" by Nick D'Alto, describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. There is a paragraph where it can detect students facial action, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a17dc7ebbe19,B78889CD7103,the value of using this technology to read students' emotional experessions is something I can agree with. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+28233bdcdfc6,B78889CD7103,"In the passage, the article states that a classroom computer could recognize a stuudent becoming confused or bored (Dr. Huang). After that, it could modify the lesson similar to what an effective human instructor could do ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a73134dd3606,B78889CD7103,My response is that a classroom computer that has FACS(Facial Action Coding System) can help the students lessons and making them understand easier. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41aebbe7c35b,B78889CD7103,"Advertisments can help students feel interested on what's on the ad. I'm a student and ads appear in my laptop. Most ads I'm not interested in and I intend to skip the ad. There are new ads appearing everyday on a students phone or on their laptop. The passage states that if you smile when a web ad appears, a similar ad might follow. If you frown, the next ad will be different ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+150c2d21490f,B78889CD7103,"If a student is depressed and is watching a video, the FACS will detect his emotions ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd32551b6630,B78889CD7103,There is an amount of students who play video games at home afterschool. Most are on their laptops or PC's instead of console. I believe that games can cause violence ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3a59801e804,B78889CD7103,"Students can have fun with a game on their pc, but later on that emotion can change into something else. It could change into anger. The FACS can help that. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc1f3a2b7e59,B78889CD7103,"If they read a student having a different attitude that's unecessary, it could make the laptop shutdown for the student to take time calming down. In the passage, the FACS could work for video games or video surgery. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc5911b40de4,B78889CD7103,"Another thing, the FACS can remind the student to do their work first before playing on their laptop, just like what the mother would to their child. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+89085fa6526d,B78889CD7103,"Finally, I believe the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions can help help them be more educated by helping on their lessons, emotions, and control. Computers need to understand that, too (Dr. Huang). ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+17988e97580f,B79ABAFC71D1,"The author thinks, that exploring venus could be a dangerous thing to do ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e3f3eb7820b3,B79ABAFC71D1,because what he says about how other spacecraft landed there and how they didnt live for a few hour that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+318ef3f44f85,B79ABAFC71D1,"that is why spacecraft now have not gone to venus in over more than three decades. In paragraph two in the last sentence, it shows how he talked about spacecrafts. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07d473c65589,B79ABAFC71D1,"The author also states how the tempeture is in venus in the third paragph, third sentence ,he talks about how hot it is in venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5f03d65dde1,B79ABAFC71D1,"he said it is about over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and it also say¨beyond high pressure and heat,venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquaks,and frequen lighting.....¨ ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3fca4829c92,B79ABAFC71D1,"nasa is putting other lives at risk to go study venus, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+68afdd1bac82,B79ABAFC71D1,"in paragraph five, frst two sentence it tell how nasa might have people go and discover more about venus.
+
+My opinion on all of this that the author was talking about. It feels like a movie like,maybe in the future who knows when, we might have to go to venus because of something that happen in earth. we are going to leave homes and everything we worked on and live a new life in another planet. It kinda reminds me of that movie ¨Wall-e¨ they left earth nasty and a lot of poultion and went to live in a spacecraft in space. I would not want to live like that because what if somthing happened in the spacecraft ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9eb29706886,B79ABAFC71D1,"Back to what i was talking about, yea it would be cool to live in another planet, but those people that nasa is going to send out ton explore venus, have to explore it really carefully. I find it really interesting how there is a similar planet to earth. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c061b8a6ff07,B7AE34990F95,"as the author said "" studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents"". ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5c2fb6404392,B7AE34990F95,"its also called the "" evening star"" is one of the brightest points of light in the noght sky, and its also the esecound planet from ourr sun, its simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point ofpoint of Earth, it has proved a very challnenging place to examine more closely. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cac151e876b2,B7AE34990F95,"And its also called the Earth's twin, becues the closest plant to shape like earth in tearms of density and size, and its the closeset plant to earth, somtimes its vence that closest to earth and somtimes its Mars, humans tried sending space crafts to land on venus, but none of them manged to servive the landing for more then few hours and that explains why no speaceship manged to go there yet for more then three decades. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c98366eaf41d,B7AE34990F95,and thats why human need to study it more more. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ae85decb6fda,B7AE34990F95,one of the reasons it have een chalnging to use ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12897639facf,B7AE34990F95,"to reach mars becues it has an atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide becues the cllouds of corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. and its also very hot there the temreture reaches ""800f' and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet. these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouunter on earth; such as enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomes to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. and it has the hottest surffece if any plant, and also a while ago Venus had ocians just like earth and it could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f897a68b552,B7AE34990F95,"
+and thats why we need too study venus more becues if anything happend to earth we might have a secound place to live in. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7acbbf74139b,B7E936A82959,The advantages of limiting car usages ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+879f9225edff,B7E936A82959,"it lowers green house gases, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+235f98fa0af8,B7E936A82959,"less traffic, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+22c4e7759874,B7E936A82959,a reduction in enviromental problems. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+372bcf4e4ad0,B7E936A82959,"Less lung porblems or other desieses. fresher air and less enviromental problems like global warming. Even smog in Paris or Beijing, even China. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37e59e553b7b,B7E936A82959,"no lights to stop at for 10 minutes. The only thing that could make you late for work or school would be you walking to slow or taking a transit or subway. Also, people will be fined for parking in the wrong area, making people want to drive less. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+034e1ff94dd8,B7E936A82959,"Like, global warming or green house gases. less trees would be cut down for parking lots or paved streets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e15320973b3b,B7E936A82959,"The advantages to limiting car usage would be that it lowers green house gases, less traffic, and a reduction in enviromental problems. Such as global arming, green house gases, and smog. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b96af9da9d80,B8476CE22AF9,"""The challenge of studying Venus"" is a very interesting story. In the story the author tells us a lot about Venus and its harsh conditions. The title describes the story very well. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ca127203dbb8,B8476CE22AF9,Venus seems like it would be very challenging to explore and the author gives many reasons why it would be so difficult. For some reason though he doesnt really list any benefits to exploring Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a2084f3ba403,B8476CE22AF9,Throughout the whole story the author is just making Venus sound like a horrible place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fce51db295f0,B8476CE22AF9,"In the article he writes "" Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."" Again he is describing Venus to sound like an awful place, so why would you want to explore it. Another good claim he makes is that, ""since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.""
+
+Why would you go explore Venus in a space craft if all of them were destroyed. If it where me i would not want to explore Venus, the author has given me plenty of reasons not to. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+da43e3584f31,B8476CE22AF9,"Throughout the story the author does list at least one benefit to exploring Venus. In the story he writes, "" it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system."" Yes i can agree that would be a great reason to explore Venus, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+89f88fa490ef,B8476CE22AF9,"but here are the downsides to that. Venus now is not like Earth, it is more like a destroyed Earth. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+43c33f41dcba,B8476CE22AF9,"The author writes "" on the planets surface tempatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit."" You cant even walk on the surface without burning up, how is this like Earth? The author also mentions,"" Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans."" All those oceans that may have been their are gone now. Why would we explore a destroyed Earth? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e301036b1505,B8476CE22AF9,In conclusion the author does not give many benefits to exploring Venus. All he really did was list the benefits to why we shouldnt explore Venus. In my personal opinion if i where a scientest and somone read me this i would not want to explore Venus. In the end i do not believe the author makes a good case to explore Venus. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a69fe8dbbd0a,B84A7F39D6A1,""" The reason that 44 nations joined the program was because, when World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins, people around the world had got together from different nations to help these poor people, that got there town destroyed, house/apartments, and also helped the animals get taken care of. In the text it says, "" to help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA ( United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration)"" UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys"".
+
+The Seagoing Cowboys are people to help take care of the horses, young cow, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke had been traveling with food supplies for the aniamals and that people need. On Luke second trip he served as a night watchman, his job was to check the animals every hour. Being a sea going cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke. It opened up the world for him. Luke was glad that he was able to help other people from other countries to help when World War II ended. He was also glad to help take care of these animals so they can still live. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9514e5008579,B867F487B9F3,"Personal automobiles and cars have played a major role throughout the world since the invention of the car in World War 2. Cars have been a very successful invention and many people drive their own every day on their way to work, school or other places their feet cannot carry them. Though the car has fulfilled its duties in making the lives of humans easier, it has also contributed to many negative events. For example, car emissions get trapped in the atmosphere and cause living things to breathe in dirty air around them. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0797a5d58fdc,B867F487B9F3,a revolutionary idea has been spreading around the world: using personal automobiles less. ,Position,Effective,,,
+682233f2c479,B867F487B9F3,promoted a happier society ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32747623408c,B867F487B9F3,a cleaner environment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5e8a7e5d6cf,B867F487B9F3,an open attitude towards alternative transportation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0537256be7b,B867F487B9F3,"by establishing an agreement to decrease car use, people have been said to be happier and stress-free. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6c90102eeac9,B867F487B9F3,"The continuing congestion and traffic jams that are among most areas of the world, create an enormous amount of stress for the people driving. Many develop road rage or irritability and are unhappy after suffering from a long ride home because of traffic. Some believe that cities should become more like Vauban, a community in Germany in which the citizens have given up their cars, because those who live there are not focused on driving and are pleased living in such a manner. Heidrun Walter, a mother who lives in Vauban, portrays her love for this car-free community when she states, ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"" (Rosenthal). By living in an area with little or no use of cars, the society becomes more cheerful and has less stress to cope with. In addition, with no cars people are forced to spend more of their time outside to get from one place to another. In Bogota, Colombia there is an annual car-free day, in which anyone who does use their car has to pay a fine. Many spend their day outside walking or riding their bikes to get around and believe that the car-free day is ""a good opportunity to take away stress..."" (Selsky). As they exercise more without cars and enjoy the great outdoors, they wear bright smiles on their faces and look at things with a positive attitude. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c84e17ff9b6,B867F487B9F3,"With a smaller amount of people using their personal vehicles, less gas emissions are becoming a part of the Earth's atmosphere. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a6a7235f5258,B867F487B9F3,"Humans breathe in the gases that are polluting the air and can become sick from it. The environment suffers from the dirty air and may not be able to sustain life if there is not a stop to the large amounts of pollutants being emitted into the air. In the United States, passenger cars are the cause of ""up to 50 percent"" of greenhouse gas emissions while in Europe they are ""responsible for 12 percent"" (Rosenthal). This means that the car use in the United States is ruining the air around us and assists greatly in creating a disgusting environment. In popular and global cities, pollution is even more noticeable and overwhelming. For example, in Paris smog has become an everlasting issue. The climate in the area contributes to the smog filling the air along with the use of cars: ""Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions"" (Chicago Tribune). To reduce the smog in the area, an elaborate plan was taken into action. Cars with even license plates could not drive on certain days and cars with odd license plates could not drive on the other days. By doing this, the air in Paris cleared up dramtically. Therefore by promoting a system where car usage is not as common, the environment can become healthier and cleaner, which benefits the citizens of the Earth. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+550da95e7bae,B867F487B9F3,declining the use of cars creates an open attitude towards alternative transportation methods. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4fe21118b77d,B867F487B9F3,"Those who live in car-free communities discover new ways to reach the destinations they have reach throughout the day. Some will utilize their body and take advantage of nature by biking or walking from one place or another. Others might us public transportation or will car-pool with those who do own a car. As previously mentioned before, Colombia participates in a car free day, which means ""Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses"" to get where they needed to be (Selsky). Their use of other means of transportation on the day without cars, exemplifies that it is possible to live using other ways to get around. Some people are against the idea of using other transportation, but if they were to see the impact the alternatives have, they would be more accepting. These days many young people tend to get their license later by waiting until they reach their twenties, suggesting that they can live a happy life without relying on a personal automobile. Instead of using their own cars, they find other ways to get to work or school. These people become acclimated to organizing their lives ""around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends"" (Rosenthal). Younger people who commit their lives to walking or public transportation, become aware of the fact that driving a machine that can negatively affect the world is not a necessity. Their awareness then can continue passing on to each generation and can ultimately prevent the excessive use of cars throughout the world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d136daf54b0e,B867F487B9F3,"a life without cars might be a life worth living since it contributes to a stress-free society, a healthy environment, and an acceptance of other means of transportation. By relying less on cars, people can eliminate the variety of negative impacts on the world. The Earth can become a happier, cleaner, and more accepting place with a dead engine.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c15c61014d34,B86BB171770C,The face on the planet is just a weird land marking. It was not made by aliens it was only just luck that it was there. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d65887e5e1e6,B86BB171770C,The face that you think is there is just from the land was or an astroid ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1a276d39201b,B86BB171770C,It it was made by aliens there wouldn't just one face on the planet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+32ae30126026,B86BB171770C,The aliens didn't know what we look like or what a Egypion Pharaoh would look like. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b6e3895caa50,B86BB171770C,Why would the aliens just make the face and not the body too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4380f20c4234,B86BB171770C,When Michael Malin went up to take a picture of the the face they got a sharper snap for the picture. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b208c713f4d2,B86BB171770C,There was no alien monuments or landforms for the aliens. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+109a703c6c07,B86BB171770C,The people who want the face to be made by aliens are not very smart. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff9f496f5a0a,B86BB171770C,"If there are aliens and they find out who is watching and trying see if they are real, might come here to hurt or kill us. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0c67d7082fdc,B86BB171770C,"If we do find what do you think will happen, we ""hi we are from earth we are the ones who spy on you"".
+
+First they proubly won't know what we are saying.
+
+And they will most likely want to kill us. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c9539012c5bf,B86BB171770C,"What we found was just a land marking that isn't something to we should mess with.
+
+What you saw was just a land marking that means nothing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aae39ab8166b,B86BB171770C,"There are no such things as aliens, and if there are such things as aliens we should just leave them alone. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eeea75eb5794,B8757E80EB9D,Venus can be a scary planet when it comes down to its features. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+13b4e7298f37,B8757E80EB9D,The writer to this story certanly convinced me that we should not study Venus anymore ,Position,Adequate,,,
+34049db9f38e,B8757E80EB9D,"We have tried to land spacecraft on the planet before, but none have last no more than a few hours ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd9ffac9868a,B8757E80EB9D,"how are we supposed to study it when it just keeps destroying our spacecrafts. We haven't tried it again in a decade. The reason to this is that Temperatures vary around 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus has a thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide. If us humans even take a step on Venus we get crushed. Venus has a 90% atomic pressure, which is greater than what we have on Earth. It could even crush a submarine and those are supposed to outstand pressure from the ocean. Venus isn't a very pretty planet either, it has a familiar features as valleys,mountains, and craters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ce75a3c671c,B8757E80EB9D,We could use spacecraft to hover over venus about 30 miles or so above it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a4eee60f71fa,B8757E80EB9D,Even if we did that we couldn't take sample rocks or gas ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+005046268be0,B8757E80EB9D,"Are technology gets better throughout the years, so maybe one day well figure a way out to oustand that heat and pressure ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1e27af14ea91,B8757E80EB9D,"Even if we do that though, what would be the sense if we cant even live on the planet. Half of the stuff we use today will never outstand the heat or pressure that Venus has. Including phones,cars,and houses. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8b5aa7e5543b,B8757E80EB9D,This shows you that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f2e851c9c991,B87E8822B2D2,"Cell phone use should not be legal while driving, it causes many accidents even fatalities. Drivers become careless while driving when using cell phones. ",Position,Effective,,,
+93847763fb19,B87E8822B2D2,"Cell phones cause distractions while on the road. Drivers do not pay attention to the road, which causes accidents to happen. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cf8f20f9a396,B87E8822B2D2,The most prevalent distractions are texting and talking on a cell phone while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+411dd2a9d215,B87E8822B2D2,"Even the act of just dialing a cell phone can be dangerous. This increases the crash risk by 3 times. This is one of the worst distractions drivers can have, Due to the fact that you are not paying attention to the road. The driver's hands are not on the steering wheel which causes you to lose control of your car. This increases the accident risk highly. This is only one reason why cell phone use while driving should be illegal. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a4e218e9cef1,B87E8822B2D2,"This causes the same problems as just dialing a cell phone. Drivers are too busy focused on their screen to pay attention to the road. They are also too busy thinking about their responses and what to say to pay attention to other drivers on the road. Since it usually takes two hands to text, the drivers have no hands on the steering wheel. This distraction causes the most fatalities. This is according to a sign over I-355, which states, ""857 traffic accidents caused last year due to texting. This is just another reason cell phone use while driving should be illegal. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+17080dbc12b3,B87E8822B2D2,"Drivers however, underestimate their risks of getting into an accident while using their cell phone on the road. Companies also have this break with reality. They promote things like hand free devices, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6783d88dfde2,B87E8822B2D2,"even though those have been shown not to eliminate the risk of getting into an accident. ""Device makers and auto companies acknowledge the risks of multitasking behind the wheel, but they aggressively develop and market gadgets that cause distractions.
+
+They acknowledge these things happen but they still market things that will cause distractions and increase accident risk. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+00e1252ef31f,B87E8822B2D2,"Cell Phone use should be illegal while driving. The worst are texting and talking on the cellphone while driving. Both inhibit driver awareness and increase the risk of getting into an accident. Hands free devices do not eliminate the risk of getting into an accident; it's a horribly common misconception. Cell phone distractions on the road cause accidents. If Illinois outlawed cell phone use, more people's lives would be saved.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+81ddc739de43,B884018E887C,"A boy named luke that graduated for high school and had worked two part time jobs in a grocery store . His friend had ask him if he wanted to go to Europe on a cattle boat ,luke said yes he said he couldnt have said no beacuse he doesnt like saying no to people. And he also said that it was a oportunity of a lifetime. It was 1945, world war ll was over in Europe, and many countries were left in runis . And too hope that those familys recover on food and animals. Then there were sign ups for a UNRRA Seagoing Cowboy and so Luke and Don sign up for it .In August 14,1945 ,'' Luke said , the day the Pacific war ended.'' they got their seaman's paper and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster , headed for Greece- with a cargo of 335 ho rsees plus enough hay and oats feed them . L uke turned 18 before arriving in Greeece , which meant he he could be draft ed gfor military service.
+
+When my draft board learned that i was on a cattle- boat trip , they h ad told me to just keep doing t hat for my service . 'by the time he was discharged in 1947 , Luke had mde trips - the mast of any saegoing cowboy. The cattle boat trip were an unbelivable oppportunity fo ra smalll towm boy,; he said , besides helping people , I had the side benefit of seein of seeeing Eurpe and China.
+
+Then time past and Luke found time to hhave fun on board , especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded . The cowboys played baseball and they aslo had played volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournament, facing , boxing, reading , whittling , and games als help pass the time . But being a Seagoing Cowboys was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. it opened up the world to Luke e. '' i'm grateful for the opportunity'', he says . its made me more aware of people of other counties and their needs.'' And that aareness stays with him leading his familly to host a number of international students and exchange wisitersfor many years.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+33dde4fe1862,B89BB1FC1E1F,This article tells us the challenges that venus has to lay for us but this auther has found the was we try to beat tose challenges like in section 7 last sentenes he say that if we can just fine the resouses to build somthing to hold that force that venus has we could fined a lot that we dont even know. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ab0ff9dfbce6,B89BB1FC1E1F,Auther did a very great job finding his resouces and fact about his story he told ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cfcdf2449c0f,B89BB1FC1E1F,He's a hard worker because of this topic this isnt a everyday topic people talk about I love how he talks about the trips at the end of the passages that we might be able to go the venus and look at what its like on that planet ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+60096ce027de,B89BB1FC1E1F,To support what ive been talking about in section 8 line 1 he says Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value I beleave that if we challenge are selfs hard and hard that we could be about to make it there and by him saying venus has values i bleave that if we got there we could possible be about to see if they ever had ocean or animals or plants just like us we all know that the plantes are almost the same but just have some slite differenes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4d40082d8e4,B89BB1FC1E1F,This article is good for people how like space and sciences to learn about venus and what we want to do as later missions it is possible that somthing once lived on venus thats probablly why we call it the twin to earth because it just like earth but just the first stages of earth. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+44b5b0b36956,B8B5B46DA523,"No one has ever landed on venus so the author is saying this because no space ship has survived landing for more than a few hours. maybe the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on veunus more than three decade, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9868c53d77b8,B8B5B46DA523,venus really is a challanging planet for people to study. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b6d10f1a5f4,B8B5B46DA523,"Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide covers venus, even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in the atmophere. On the surface, temperatures average over 800 degress F and the pressure is 90 times greater than our planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7683369e869f,B8B5B46DA523,"The conditions are extreme than anything humans encounter, due to the pressure and th heat of venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d88629dfe581,B8B5B46DA523,"
+Beyond the pressure and the heat venus has geology and wather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to the land surface. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8db3b43c5381,B8B5B46DA523,"It'll be dangerous even trying to live on venus but if you want to live on vnus be prepared for these desasters. Like for example our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over venus would advoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b33e61029a48,B8B5B46DA523,"
+This is why NASA is working on a wat to approach and study venus, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+96517470c123,B8B5B46DA523,"like some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tsted in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in the conditions of venus. Imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling venusian landscape, that'll be very cool and amazing to see and watch on TV. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2dad0892e36,B8B5B46DA523,Just if you ever think about wanting to go visit venus..make sure you bring lots of water and a cooling suit that'll cool you when you attempt to walk along across venus.       ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a12460566572,B8B64FD4EF6B,"Advantage of limits on car usage and life goes on without car,car free cities in german suburb. these articles talks about how car is aint realy needed being use how now day peole and the article in german suburd,life goes on without cars discuss people given up on they car. there are only two places to park they have too it either you park at the edge of the development garage or buy a space for 40,000 along with home. As a result, 70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars 57 percent sold they cars just to move there. and source 2 paris bans driving due to smog. after all record pollution ,paris enforcced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. monday a motorists with even-number license plates were ordered to leave their cars at the home or suffer a 22-euro. these same would apply to odd-numbered plats wellof course. doing the time of peroid 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters. source 3 car free day is spinning into a big hit in bogota .everyone in bogota took they day off car.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b0f047aeff4,B8D49BD571C2,I think that people should participate in the 'Seagoing Cowboys' ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e41f34d4f0f9,B8D49BD571C2,"you will learn things, know things, and see things that are new to you. You would also be very amuzed by half of the things you see, such as long ago history buildings, and even musumes. This event that you will take, will open the world up to you. It will show you how other people do things, and how they get treated. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6328c1fe2f17,B8D49BD571C2,"If I had the chance to be a 'Seagoing Cowboy' I would take the chance, because there is so many opportunities that you will take such as lifetime events. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf5433ac8b1e,B8D49BD571C2,"You would see things and stuff that you probally have never seen before, I would love to see Europe an Africa. Like Luke went to a castle that was most likely beautiful and amazing. It would also be a good family trip or good friends trip, if you went with one of them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a40ff83ad110,B8D49BD571C2,"
+Many people are instrested in history so it would be a good trip full of amuzed things. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8cf13aa1f8d2,B8D49BD571C2,"You also could probally visit the history building, were special events took place. People would even ask you to try or do something and that would also be a lifetime event that you always wanted to do. Most people don't like doing this stuff because it 'takes to long to get there' or something, but like i keep saying, it's a lifetime event that you would want to take because maybe you will never be able to do it again, but you can atleast tell people you have been there. While you are there enjoying them places, take pictures so you will always remember that moment, they say if you take a picture it will last longer. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e6091b086fa6,B8D49BD571C2,"In this story that i just wrote, it tells you good reasons to take the chance of becoming a 'Seagoing Cowboy' .The fact that it would be so amazing and cool, and it once a again, a lifetime event. I would like you to think about what you would see and adventure while you are going adventuring to these amazing places, or maybe you don't want too, I would still like for you to think about that. So, for now on I want you to think about what i told you, and think about becoming one. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a62d1b8808f6,B8D9250543E0,The author suortts both ideas it the text he thinks that its smart that people whant to go visit Venus but at the same time he thinks that its very dangers to go too venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4aaae3063c79,B8D9250543E0,"Venus is like earths twin venus haves that same shape, and they even think that venus youse to look like earth. Venus just have diferint was of being its salf like the acid rain, hot temperatures, and even its crazy weathers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+14dea24fc9d0,B8D9250543E0,"I still think that trying to learn about differient plants is not right becuses us as people doint even know adout are oun plant. I still think that we have a lots of time till earth becomes like Veunus. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7582ff6104b1,B8D9250543E0,"In the text the author is trying to tail us that "" Venus is the closest planet to Earth is terms of density and size,and occasionally the closest in destance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eda1305ade22,B8D9250543E0,"Are people in NASA havent even found a way to land in Venu. From the text 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+61928f7b7eba,B8D9250543E0,"""Each preious mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship had touched down on Veunus in more than three decades."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d56cca5f7c8a,B8D9250543E0,Even for a perion to be there is too dangrues the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fehrenheit. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+98a9ca8ff785,B8D9250543E0,I even think that that we could not live there in Venus cuse of the climates. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ae9055e40d5,B8D9250543E0,"From the text shown that ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly surface acid in Venus's atmosphere."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+278e3f32c83b,B8D9250543E0,"Venus's is plant is formed just like earth But just with too much on it. strate from the"" Beyon high pressure and heat, Venusian geologgy and weather present additional impedimments like eruoting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to prodes seking to land on its surface."" Some scientist think that venus has youse to look eart and that it youse to support various forms of life,just like earth. From the text"" The planie has a surface of rocky sediment familiar such as valleys, mountains, and craters."" Thats how the scientist think that venus is just like earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+261df02af0a5,B8D9250543E0,If im still living when there finaly find a way to arive safly to venus I would love to go. NACA is working on a way to to git to venus and to land on that plant safly.     ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cba3c3e2d428,B8EAF80A1409,"Many students dislike completing summer projects during their vacation time. After working hard in school, they look forward to relaxing and giving their brain a rest. It is vital that we do not mentally burnout, however, it is also important that we keep our brain somewhat active during summer break. This is why students are often given summer work. There are many different types of summer projects. Some projects are more traditional, being solely focused on reading and writing. On the contrary, some assignments are hands on, designed to test students' creativity. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4c88e26e0c76,B8EAF80A1409,"some people may think that students would create less overwhelming assignments, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+096b402094d0,B8EAF80A1409,teachers should ultimately design summer work ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6acdb12af78b,B8EAF80A1409,"to ensure that students are truly challenging themselves, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07f79003beb1,B8EAF80A1409,"not wasting their vacation time, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3efb553fe8a6,B8EAF80A1409,well prepared for class when school starts. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7e57e22073c5,B8EAF80A1409,Some people believe that summer projects should be student-designed so that students are not overly stressed during their vacation time. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e5db6c26595e,B8EAF80A1409,"While this opinion is relevant, it is not a valid point because students will end up making their work too easy. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+041b86065d0d,B8EAF80A1409,"If tasks are too easy, then students will be damaging their success in the long run. Their work should be difficult and involve a deep level of thinking. Challenging work is more beneficial to students because throughout life they will face many complex problems. They need to develop problem-solving skills early so that they know how to persevere during tough times. A good example of ambitious perseverance can be seen in scientific experiments. One leading historical scientist was Albert Einstein. In order to discovery electricity, he needed to perform a great number of trials. At times he felt stressed, as if he would never reach his goal. However, eventually the lightning produced electricity, and he had introduced a concept that would impact everyday life forever. This portrays the significance of challenging yourself, being that challenges stimulate a stronger drive to succeed. It is often frustrating when students encounter difficult work from their teachers, but developing these problem-solving skills will immensely improve their future well-being. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+153e0286a5f1,B8EAF80A1409,"Psychologist Erik Erickson developed the eight significant psycho social stages that outline the common conflicts experienced throughout a lifetime. In his seventh stage, known as ""integrity vs. despair,"" he describes the adulthood stage when people look back on their life. Many adults in this stage scroll through their overall progress and accomplishments. They decide if they spent their time wisely and lived a fulfilling life. If they look back at life and conclude that it was spent efficiently, they experience a sense of integrity. On the other hand, if they feel as if they did not make the most of their time on earth, they develop a terrible feeling of despair. It is important that students, being at such a young age, recognize the value of time. Although everyone remembers the saying ""life is short,"" many people forget to practice what they preach. If students are given teacher-designed projects, this will ensure that they efficiently spend their time during summer break. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+50b5b5e33c57,B8EAF80A1409,"In other words, the work assigned will be less surprising because students have already completed projects from their teachers. In the novel, ""I Am Malala,"" Malala's father prepares her to be a successful public speaker. At first Malala was not very good at speaking in front of a big audience, but he worked with her everyday to build her knowledge and improve her skills. Eventually, she became one of the most influential activists ever to exist. She is able to address important topics, such as women's rights, in ways that she never could before. Through proper preparation, her weak public speaking turned into her greatest strength. This proves that goals are met when students can connect with their mentors. Students must be given the chance to build a relationship with their teachers. If summer projects are teacher-designed, this will allow students to email their teachers with questions about the assignments. This will not only generate a strong relationship, but it will also prepare students for the style of teaching they will soon face at school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7920657838b,B8EAF80A1409,"Summer projects should be teacher-designed in order to set up students for success in the long run. Everyone deserves a chance to succeed, and student-designed projects can harm this potential success. Even though some people think that students would create less stressful work, teachers should design summer projects to ensure that they are difficult enough, genuinely worth spending time on, and quality preparation for kids to thrive in class. It is important to be independent and take initiative, but it is more important to live a fulfilling life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+364672ed6188,B90C8C40C0A0,"Summer projects are immensely helpful in order to keep your mind active and intelligent when your're not in school, constantly stimulated by academic subjects. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bac8eeb017a5,B90C8C40C0A0,the summer projects should be student-designed rather than teacher designed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+51ab61dfc8c6,B90C8C40C0A0,"Students making the projects know what will help their peers learn throughout the summer, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+64e9aaf79116,B90C8C40C0A0,"they know what they have truly learned rather than what teachers assumed they have been taught by other teachers, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6813e0a30e00,B90C8C40C0A0,they have the opportunity to showcase their creativity and passions through the project they complete. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1b34321915fa,B90C8C40C0A0,"In order to be most successful, students should have authority to be creative and responsible for their summer projects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+498ccc2e0330,B90C8C40C0A0,"Summer projects purpose is to continue the growth of your mind when you are out of the classroom for about 90 days. A lot can happen to adolescents over the summer, a lot of things that anyone who is not in the same phase of life can truly understand. Many teenagers find sanity with their peers and friends in this time frame of growing up. As seen and extensively studied by Erik Erikson, Erikson came to the consensus that when you are going through the school-age stage of life you begin to pull away from your parents and adults to find yourself and find your independence. In result, you grow more drawn to your friends and peers, due to them understanding the phase of development you are going through. The connection students have with each other is something that can not be matched by teachers. No matter the background or clique a student is in they all have one major characteristic in common that connects them, they are all students. Teachers have not been in school in years and they don't connect with the same things as this generation does. Teachers did not have the same technology, pop culture, or even the same societal standards as today students have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+64f220c91e3b,B90C8C40C0A0,"Throughout my school years, I find myself stressed and concerned every year when I receive a new teacher, after a long and carefree summer. The teachers have so much faith in their coworkers and the retention of the knowledge that according to them ""we should have learned in years past."" They begin to assign ""easy"" and ""refresher"" work that they assume we have been taught. The lack of communication between teachers is a hard burden on students due to their past teachers exclaiming that ""you do not need to worry about that, your teacher next year will teach you,"" and your present teachers thinking that you had already learned it in your past courses. As the student, you are left with the sense of delusion and dissatisfaction on why you lack this important skill and learning target. You struggle to understand basic fundamentals of learning and when you are assigned a project you begin to sweat the little gaps in your learning. Every student knows this feeling of remorse of being assigned a project on material you just havent been taught yet. Students who design the projects know what they and their peers have been taught and what they all lack because they have all endured the same classes and teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3d23fc57bef,B90C8C40C0A0,"The creativity of generation Z is outstanding and unique to modern day society. The opportunity for students to create the projects would be extraordinary and expressive of our generation. The use of creativity is very limited in school. You are to be complacent with the standards of your school through the strict rules and regulations they place. Many of the rules you are given are not only rigid but not needed. Teachers set boundaries on students and rarely let them experience and express their own style and flair. When students are allowed to indulge in their personal ambiance their limits are endless. This is embodied through art and the publishing of students in modern day. More books written by teenagers are selling on the shelves today, than ever before. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9e1bdfeeb4c2,B90C8C40C0A0,The teachers teach every student the same in order to maintain a consistency and basis of learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+522a49d96cc9,B90C8C40C0A0,By doing this they lose the chance to see the passions and talents of the individual students. Consistent learning is needed but teachers lack the understanding that every student is different and have their own learning process and strengths. Modern day students recognize the differences throughout their peers and themselves. They notice that the differences unite them and it is ordinary to be different. Students who create the projects will implement the material to be expressive of their peers because they have the same mindset that comes with being in generation of identity and self-expression. Teachers do not see this aspect of learning they see learning targets and standards. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+acd9e2f27e81,B90C8C40C0A0,"Student-designed projects would implement effective, continual learning over the summer break due to the students connection with their peers, knowledge of common learning gaps, and the generational need of creativity and self-expression. The purpose is to continue learning while not being in a classroom, but how can we continue to grow our knowledge if the students can not establish a connection with project due to being out-of-touch with modern day and the mentality of today' students. Therefore, in order to achieve maximum learning, students should be tasked with the project design.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+10779dbfb06e,B91B697EB28E,"Driving a new car right out of the dealer ship, can be quite facinating, but global warming and pollution doesn't sound as quite facinating. People tend to listen and follow instructions as to not using cars, but they'll get over it in a couple of days and continue driving cars after a while. The reason I say this is because this is how I am, I tend to listen now, and five minutes later, its as if no one has ever told me anything. So Im guessing that lots of people around here are the same way. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa20795315a9,B91B697EB28E,"But this is no time to be doing what you want, its about saving earth and everyone in it, and trying to avoid cars. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+66bc157fb065,B91B697EB28E,"Driving without a car can be a quite tireing, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+1a1af64afc26,B91B697EB28E,"but a paying a 22-euro fine, which is 31 dollars in america, doesn't sound quite convinient. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d52585cfbb3d,B91B697EB28E,"This what the city of Paris did to all owners of a cars who were told to leave there cars at home and refused to do so. Apperently, around 4,000 drivers were fined, and around twenty-seven cars were impounded to the people that had attitudes or strong reaction to there fine. Now in my opinion, do you seriously want to get risked and get your car taken away or pay a fine? Most likely no right? If you were told to leave your car at home for everyones own good, just leave it, save 31 dollars in yoiur pocket, maybe even buy a chicken or something right? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50535fc7dda9,B91B697EB28E,"The cause of all this comotion in Paris was because of an intensifying smog bieng built that also ran across Beijing, China, which is also known as a well polluted city in the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68752c452a1b,B91B697EB28E,"Smog can be a quite dangerous to us all, and some countries are trying to help the enviorment, a place like Bogota, Culombia. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+43660920ab38,B91B697EB28E,"What they have done was ban cars for a day to try and to lower air pollution. They as well gave out 25 dollar fines to all the violaters that did not participate with program built. Now, are you seeing my point? Can you see were my point is going? Trying to litmit car usage is what im trying to say. If only we could all be like Mr. Sivaks son, who takes Bay Area Transit when he can, im pretty sure that this whole pullution and global warming, wont be as quite frustrating to think about, or worring as to what will happen next to all the pollution. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+399114c69773,B91B697EB28E,"My conclusion to all this for all of us to take a stand and try to limit car usage in all over the world atleast for a day, or be something like the city of Vauban, Germany, in which they have banned cars in a big part of the city, known as ""smart planning"". As I said in the begining, cars can be a fun thing to be riding around in, but they are on of the main reasons why pollution and smog is being created and becomeing a threat to all of our sociebty of today of all over the world. So yes, this my opinion, which should aslo be yours, we all should have a serious limiting in cars before everything get out of hands and its to late. If you can ride a bike, then ride a bike. if you can go walking to your job, school, home, or anywhere, go walking. Try to avoid car usage when its really not needed, and quit being lazy and start walking.                     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2f4ad0ba2a53,B9347CDF2461,"*BAM* A loud sound cracks across the intersection as if a bomb just went off but in reality, it was the sound of a SUV running into the back of a man on a scooter because the driver of the SUV was on their cellphone. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3303b8fe987f,B9347CDF2461,Before you decide to pick up a cellphone while you're operating a motor vehicle know the risks you're taking ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+978f027f745f,B9347CDF2461,"Everyone in the car and in other vehicles are prone of getting hurt when a mind-altering device steers you away from the concentration you should have while driving. So many lives are taken or altered because of the simple decision to send or reply to one text message. If precautions are heavily enforced before adults and teens especially enter the car, then maybe this epidemic can become obsolete. Fines are enforced but how well is the question? Phones are the biggest distraction when you enter a car by far so this doesn't completely forget about alcohol or trying to change the radio station but technology has become so advanced that we have voice text and on a star. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+71f322ec0a50,B9347CDF2461,If the message is that important phones should become voice-activated and only respond to your voice so we can still pay attention to the road and send out a text without removing our hands from the wheel. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2ce6e05f8324,B9347CDF2461,Technology has also clutched us with Bluetooth if you need to stay in communication just use Bluetooth and make a phone call instead which is completely easier than sending a text anyway because its faster and you can get responses much quicker than you could with a text message. Reality is one text or call could wreck it all. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a668dfaae130,B9347CDF2461,"Ever since the emergence of cell phones, this generation has become heavily dependent on it for every minute of every day. Cell phones and texting were created ultimately to provide communication but it has now become so much more than that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c01261b7c231,B9347CDF2461,The U.S. Government should ban texting while driving in all fifty states NO QUESTIONS ASKED! ,Position,Effective,,,
+90aec67decd1,B9347CDF2461,"Visual distractions are a nuisance A visual distraction is anything that takes your eyes off the road. While driving we are constantly being side tracked by signs and advertisements we see all over the place from the newest restaurants opening, to the $100 billion Powerball billboards on the highway, the last thing you need to be doing is trying to reply to a text while paying attention to all of these catchy signs. And lastly, manual distractions which are any distractors causing you to take your hands off the wheel such as reaching for your phone to send that quick text. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d1daf4043bab,B93581E854BD,I think the technology called the Facial Action Coding System is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b5fb876bb22,B93581E854BD,I think it is a very big advantage of using this type of technology and it gets more work done ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74628753ceeb,B93581E854BD,also less thinking into the drawings or other types of things that could involve using this technology. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d5dee5982d5,B93581E854BD,"An example from the article is "" we humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" every day. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+60e1ea218d6b,B93581E854BD,"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there faces"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2555be490e32,B93581E854BD,"Another thing why I think this type of technology is going to be useful, Is because maybe in the future all of the work could be handed over to the technology, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dea84a7ae36b,B93581E854BD,"Letting the technology do the work for us, Which would make it much easier for humans and less stressful to think about. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9bcef5e4dd8,B93581E854BD,"In conclusion I think my statement towards this article is reasonable, Because I think many or some people would agree with it, I think many people would love to have a less stressful job, Sometimes it can get stressful in thinking what to do for the painting. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bf23c9e04b8e,B94059412B2C,"What if your principal said that everyone would have to stay after school for and extra hour only to participate in a useless activity? How would you feel if someone where to interfere with your schedule? The school says that we must participate in an extracurricular activity. You might be wondering why the school would want us to participate in a club. The whole reason is because they think that it would shape our future, give us a learning experience, and make us want to learn something new. Although this is true, there are more downsides to this rule than you think ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b50f533a4c91,B94059412B2C,It is completely unfair to force students to partake in an activity. ,Position,Effective,,,
+a1b4e6f7f04d,B94059412B2C,One of the disadvantages in a required school activity is that people might not have enough time to do things they normally do. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0d1042c18d68,B94059412B2C,"If we take an extra course, there might not be enough time to finish all our homework. When I get home, I have a substantial amount of homework to do, and I have to practice the sports I play. My schedule is already full. homework takes me the longest to do. I work on my homework thoroughly. I try to make sure there isn't any mistakes. When I do this, I'm more likely to pass the test because of how much thought and time I have put into my work. I describe this as my work ethic. My homework takes me about two to four hours at most and it takes up most of my schedule. The sports that I play take two hours. With a total of seven hours at most, I can never seem to fit anything else in my schedule. This might be surprising for other people but this is the daily schedule for average students and most students might have more to do. If we even tried to do an extra activity than we wouldn't be able to finish all of our work efficiently and properly. Adding another thing to do every day would throw off our work ethic and our grades would most likely go down. Time has such a drastic effect on us students because it can be hard to manage. Our parents, for example, suffer from time management along with us. If we all do an extra activity, then that means that school is extended another few minutes. This is hard for our parents who pick us up after school. They have to find another time to pick us up which can be stressful since their schedule is as cramp as ours. We are not able to participate in an extra curriculum because of the amount of time that we don't have, and even if we were able to, there might not be any other options. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf175697775b,B94059412B2C,"we students have to choose which activity we would like to do. Maybe you don't like any of the clubs or classes that are provided. Then they would have to choose a club that they do not enjoy, and would most likely not gain anything from their experience. Students will not gain any experience from the activities because it seems boring to them and they do not pay attention. I don't take any clubs because of the lack of time. There are some days however that I feel that I have no homework and I can do whatever I want to do. I try to join a club and there is nothing that interest me. I don't play any of the insanely popular sports, neither am I good at chess or other things. There is one club that I am interested in doing but they are only open on the days that I'm busy. I can join other clubs that my friends are in, but I will feel awkward because I don't know anything about certain topics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6ff753416877,B94059412B2C,"If the school makes it required to do an extra school activity, then some of us will not feel like going to our certain club. Because the clubs might be uninteresting for some students, they will not want to attend, and students will lose interest, and teachers will eventually get tired from teaching unfocused students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+729c363d76eb,B94059412B2C,Feeling tired after a long day of working is very common ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0447ef87e213,B94059412B2C,"We get tired because of all the stress and thinking we had to do all day. After a normal school day is over, kids are really tired and are exited to go home. We go to sleep late at night, and wake up relatively early, making it hard for us to get up, which makes us more tired than the average person. Making clubs required means that school will be extended. It is not reasonable to force the students to stay an additional few minutes to do more work. Even if the we are not tired from a school day, we still have loads of work to do after school. The same goes for the teachers. They don't want to teach kids for any longer. If the teachers have a bad day than it's even worse because they want to be alone. After their final teaching session is over, they have to do more work like grading test, projects, or homework. When school is over, I'm extremely exited to go home. I'm am sure that everyone else feels the same. If I had to stay in school for any longer, I wouldn't feel good when I come home. When I get home from the extra activity that I'm doing, I'll feel so drained and I won't be able to practice tennis, or focus on studying for a test. My English teacher, Generic_Name, says she is very tired from teaching all day. She thinks that there is no point in making kids more tired because they probably can't do their work correctly at home. With the tired students and teachers, there is no point in required extracurricular activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a67706f3cf6,B94059412B2C,"There is more to just being tired, time management, and interest. We are not going to gain anything from the classes and we will certainly not approve of it. Making after school clubs required creates more problems, Not just for the students and teachers, but for the whole school. Think about what you would gain from the extra school classes, and how easy it is to get that experience by a different, easier method. Our schedule is so cramped we can't add anything else. Some of us might not have like any classes that are provided. Almost all of us would be tired from all the new things we have to do. Think about how tired you would be, and how much time you really have, because extracurricular activities should not be required. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2aaab0e1e366,B9540E358F73,"A world without an ozone. People walking place to place. No electricity. There is no fossil fuel. These are some potential, yet dramatic, long run effects of the growing car usage since the early 1950's. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f7bf4326a559,B9540E358F73,Limiting this ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+423d80a336af,B9540E358F73,"cause a better environment, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+089ec2c26f38,B9540E358F73,"more nonrenuable energy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d0ffc2921cc,B9540E358F73,safer environments. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1ab8d5c1d6a,B9540E358F73,This new idea of limited car usage could improve our environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+aa14fdc0287c,B9540E358F73,"The ozone layer is being depleted and many believe it is due to the fossil fuels being burned by cars, trains, planes, and many other types of things. If everyone did not use their car for just a few days a month, then imagine how great the atmosphere would turn out. Some people such as Heidrun Walter, a new member of a ""carless"" community says that, he is much happier this way. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f737ee495d92,B9540E358F73,"the nonrenuable energy source, also known as fossil fuels, is slowly but surely running out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e05631508285,B9540E358F73,"if we were to just not use vehicles a few days out of every month, then these recouces may slowly start to build back up. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07f611181751,B9540E358F73,"we all know how worried everyone is about getting in a car accident, or being hit by a car, or getting 'T-boned."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+89c5e956c8f2,B9540E358F73,"Imagine being able to walk knowing in peace that there would be no accidents. Children would be able to roam the streets. The town wouldn't be as spaced out because things have to be within walking distance. IT would all be apart of something called ""smart planning."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0276882e487e,B9540E358F73,"It would be wonderful not having to worry about danger or ozone being depleted. Knowing that a energy souce would always be around would be nice too. Everyone could agree that this is a glorious idea and the turn of a new leaf, the start of a new world. A more safe and stable world. So keep them in the garage and grab that bike you bought three years ago. Start peddling. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8913b823261c,B954492209C4,in the backround I could hear the cows and people grabing on to them to save there lives ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4fcdb1236632,B954492209C4,"""A man walked up to me and said you here to bring cows?"" My freind Don all ready got some cows of the ship, people started gathering around and they were exited because they had hope. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95d1a96c947c,B954492209C4,"""People, we are short of some cowboys for our program and we'd like some voluntiers, if anyone of you are grateful enough please join."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a68d69fd4176,B954492209C4,"My friend Don came up to me and said."" It's okay we really don't need any more people, besides we'll have less food for us. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc3ce21f0eb6,B9854217BB04,"When I was reading this article, it brought to my attention that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3adca0f06a8d,B9854217BB04,"It says that "" venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a015148d1993,B9854217BB04,"I think the author supports the idea because, he talks about how he got so many reasons why the mission was successful or not, this also has a reputation.
+
+This was very previous when i decided to support this idea. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b3b4f5556a6,B9854217BB04,"Although, this author is very intelligent and experienced alot of things, i will support him in many reasons because The National Aeronautics and Space Adminstration has one part compelling idea for sending humans to study venus, he thinks its so good that now he telling people to check it out ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7130cc01233,B9854217BB04,"If he had gave up on this support that he had, Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying uo and out of their way. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f0acd6d6963d,B9854217BB04,"I agree with him on alot of things that hes done that's why i support him, he tries to provide healthier weapons and materials that would be safe to use. When he intervented this it says that many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to distribute the forceful interaction to our capability of the since of Venus ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a81221b469c4,B9854217BB04,I support him because he makes it recognizable to see his point of view on this. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+12b137dd6bdf,B9854217BB04,It must be scary to live up in Venus or mars. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+62ae7c91abb9,B9B45507DDF8,"Luke Bomberger makes the choice to go over seas to and ship horses, cows, and mules to Europe. Luke had knew this would a one time chance to go over seas with his friend, Don. They both signed up for the ""Seagoing Cowboys"" to watch over and care for the cows, horses, and mules while they go over sea ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9738b2a10edd,B9B45507DDF8,Luke is brave to do this cause a lot of people just are scared to go across the world. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8cfc31a136e1,B9B45507DDF8,Luke was brave to work to all the stuff over seas and give the people who were affected in war what they needed no matter what. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8252f2b656bf,B9B653AD964E,"The principal decided that all students must participate in one extracurricular activity which includes sports, working on the yearbook, and serve on the student council. Do I agree or disagree with this. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3b2801b7f903,B9B653AD964E,I disagree with this because every student in the school must or forced to do an after school activity. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f79668a5f102,B9B653AD964E,"students grades, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+26d3a08b6dd1,B9B653AD964E,students not caring ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+632c8abb1f8d,B9B653AD964E,"Now extra curricular activities could effect students grades for example, sports activity requires you to keep good grades to stay in the game such as Basketball, Football, and tennis this could stress and overwhelm the students in trying to keep good grades so much they could possibly fail. Then you have yearbook making and this could just tire the editor in the yearbook making curricular because of how long editing takes and typing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca165d62cb25,B9B653AD964E,"If you force students into doing something they would not enjoy they may not care for it as they did not want to do it in the first place, so the extra curriculum would be pointless by most students and would be usless for the school to do these and this could also be a waste of student time as if this plan fails this could potentialy be a waste of school resources and school time, with the exception of football the other two activitys will fail. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d648d1397d7,B9B653AD964E,"The third reason is less time at home, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8deb23ccc3b,B9B653AD964E,"what
+
+I mean for this topic is that extra curricular activitys could hold them in school for said amount of time therfore when they get home after said amount of time they will be tired and may have anything to do like homework and could possible lower moral at school due to them staying longer and less time with their family. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e80da0ed72da,B9B653AD964E,i explained why forcing students to join extra curricular activtys was a bad idea with three examples and with those three exaples i supported them with my opinon on why forcing them to join afterschool activitys was such a bad idea and how we should not do this with the opinons i had.          ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+58d27f8e7a81,B9C3E87E3FEA,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" By Nick D'Alto the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify humans emotions ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9437ab7af103,B9C3E87E3FEA,This technology is very valuable for the classroom. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7ae578a71bda,B9C3E87E3FEA,The statment is true because as said in the article the computers will be able to read ther emotions and adaped them selfs to make it seem more intertaning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef931f634ad9,B9C3E87E3FEA,"This technology would play a mager roll in learning. the text states in paragraph 6 that ""a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"","" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor"",that help for students and teatchers would be amazing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82ed8a9fe610,B9C3E87E3FEA,Plus what would it hurt ? its not a painless unnoticable process that helps the students get a better education ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df1ae6a40ddc,B9C3E87E3FEA,With this in our cumputers it can read the emotions of students better then the teacher ever could and can get the learns more focused and smarter. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+765fb18bd64d,B9C3E87E3FEA,This technology will help out students more then ever and is to valuable to pass up and should be in every classroom posible ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f0797518170e,B9E26FE6A3D7,That technology would not help in schools because the fact that students are sometimes not happy with how computer ads put up. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2f8f2fb2f7ea,B9E26FE6A3D7,Teacher can also see how their students are feeling on the computer but one flaw about this is that what if it didn't work. The technology would have to have many updates to get the system right and make the experiance better. Someone can hack that computer and can be watching you or the government might be trying to watch us. How much is schools going to be paying for these compter? Maybe around a million dollars in buying and fixing it. Most schools don't have good internet or they have bad students that might break these computers and the school or stduent would have to pay for it. The computers schools have now barely even work now so why buy a computer that most likely not going to work no better than the computers they already have. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a42e28096a02,B9E26FE6A3D7,what is the point of the putting a computer that can read people emotions by scanning their face and the students are not going get any happier they are going be excited about at first and then get bored with it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ff537682cc04,B9E26FE6A3D7,Computers are not good for kids at a young age they will get addicted to being on a computer won't go outside and then they are going to gain weight and then be fat. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc90c1ee5edb,B9F4BF3DC949,Lukes point of vew is that Luke is trying to get people to partisapatein the seagoing cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+02747bd17798,B9F4BF3DC949,it would be a good thing because people get to see the sea. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+629b131775bd,B9F4BF3DC949,And geting to be able to see the sea is a one in a life time chance because you may not be able to get anouther chance to go in the sea on a boat. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ca44385acd0,B9F4BF3DC949,anouther thing that would be cool to see is the world war ll just got over and you could see the boats and all the debre that the world war left behind. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8e014669cd2,B9F4BF3DC949,"Some people may get scared because they are in the middel of the sea and they lile to be with there famielys at night so the familys can keep them safe. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5bd51001076e,B9F4BF3DC949,some people might think that when you are in the middel of the sea you are risking your life and you should not risk your life to go at sea. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+becc9b3c65b3,B9F4BF3DC949,"
+The trip is much more than just any adernarry trip the trip will open up the world to you or any person that might go on this wonder full trip to go see what the sea looks like. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b41c040e3479,B9F4BF3DC949,Anouther thinn is that all the money that you spend to go on the trip goes to the people that need the money the most will reseve the money. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+745df4912de8,BA591AF1C837,You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c7d10e550498,BA591AF1C837,You should join it because you get to help others and animals. Also it not just a plus for them it is one for you too. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0c8831bf6b60,BA591AF1C837,The plus is that when you travel to help others you get to see the ocens all the time and beautiful sights! It is an opportunity of a lifetime if you ask me! If I was old enough I might what to think about being a Seagoing Cowboy! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f73a782aac9,BA591AF1C837,Luke's claim was a great claim! ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4c22ce7d54aa,BA591AF1C837,"Instead of working in a grocey store and a bank he became a Seagoing Cowboy! Even himself he said, '' It opened a whole new world for me'' He helped animals and more when the World War Two happend. He recovered their food supplies. He went accrosed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War two, that would be a sight to see. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+449646b51c80,BA591AF1C837,But it can also be dangerous crossing the oceans all the time. If you want to be a Seagoing cowboy you have to be brave and courageous! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d123ec5f34da,BA591AF1C837,"You need those traites because if that was your job you would'nt want to be nervous or afraid all the time.
+
+Luke had too be brave he had to have a great outlook to kept doing what he was doing, And you can too! His point of veiw was strong. He went on 9 trips and that is the most of any Seagoing Cowboy! He also had a cargo of 355 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them! He even cracked his ribs, but he is ok. Over something small but he was brave enough to keep going because he cared for the animals and he loved his job. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+975a8405738a,BA591AF1C837,You should become a Seagoing Cowboy for sure! If you like animals and travling this is the job for you! You can have so much adventure you would'nt even know what to do with it! This generation needs to carry on with the Seagoing Cowboys! To help animals and more! One day we will need your help more than ever! We need this to keep going with the Seagoing Cowboys! He even know himself it was an opportunity of a lifetime.        ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cedc3b340bd9,BA71F335957F,The author studying is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents from the article ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f4198017738,BA71F335957F,because he or she is using context clues to tell what Venus is like ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9cd5a184791f,BA71F335957F,"Venus is called the ""twin"" planet to Earth because it is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size.(paragraph 2)Venus goes around the sun in different speeds compared to Earth and the other planets. On paragraph 3, the author tells us a little bit about what Venus is like for example the atmospher is almost 97% carbon dioxide. On the planet's surface, the tempature averages 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospher pressure is 90 times greater than what we experiecne on Earth today. The author also tells us that ""Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun unlike Venus and earth and every other planet that revolves around the sun in our solar system.(paragraph 3) The author on paragraph 4 talks about what is living or on the planet Venus. For examplse, ""the planet has surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."" (paragraph 4) NASA has sent people into space and hase gone to Venus and to study the planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ed4969ee5b83,BA71F335957F,Studying Venus does have dangers things that can go wrong but the travels we have should not be able to effect on how we study our planets today or in the future. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d4a2b6053b7,BA8BE010BFC6,The author supports his story very well i think. He knows what he's talking about to be able to wright a story over it. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2023a38815f4,BA8BE010BFC6,It's something that he's probably always been into in his life! There weremany facts in there i had no idea about. It was just interesting to read about how it was so much different then what is on Earth then it was on Venus. Venus is 90 degrees more hot then what it is here. In that case the heat up there is definaly more powerful then what it is on earth. The author was testing many of different kinda examples to test them. The author has put everything in the right order so that it easyer to understand how it's going. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e355b9c1c5c,BA8BE010BFC6,This planet is more so off by it's so that its not so close to I think it would be interesting to read more of his books to see if he's that intot it with those too or it's just that one book that they have! ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2320ced4332b,BAC30ACCEEFF,"""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" is about how a computer can detect emotions from a picture or person. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+783b2b9d5df5,BAC30ACCEEFF,"In this passage, the author explains how this new software is able to detect emotions. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1ab166be620b,BAC30ACCEEFF,"""New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving emotions of others."" This new software is called Facial Action Coding System. The passage states, ""This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries."" The software detected in the Mona Lisa painting that she is ""83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83a4c40f7909,BAC30ACCEEFF,There are specific steps on how this software works. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+94af585dbbc7,BAC30ACCEEFF,"""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face."" The software detects emotions like happiness, sadness, anger, fear, disgust, and surprise. ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal."" Most people can tell how their friend is feeling based on their facial expression. The passage says,"" By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f90ae625fc7,BAC30ACCEEFF,The new technology is surprising. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+56d5c3386d2d,BAC30ACCEEFF,"The text states, ""According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them."" New technology is able to detect human emotions, even when the person is hiding them. "" To an expert, faces do not lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ""smiling"" politician or celebrity is not being truthful."" The computer software can detect human emotions from paintings, picture, and in person.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c0d9b961311,BAC5264E2DCE,"At schools, who require students to do projects over the summer, it should be the students who design what project they do ",Position,Adequate,,,
+29e03d1b5fcd,BAC5264E2DCE,if they decide the topic they will complete it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a355a54881ba,BAC5264E2DCE,they can go on various adventures to learn about the topic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e970e3911fce,BAC5264E2DCE,they can have fun with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70c71254a47d,BAC5264E2DCE,"No student likes doing work over the summer, so if they're choosing their own topic it would get them to actually enjoy learning about it. Even during the school year most students hate doing projects because the teacher assigns mostly boring projects, that no one wants to do. When they're completing the project they can set up how they're going to present it to. If your school did this, what would you prefer to do? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+204e1cabfbdf,BAC5264E2DCE,"If the students choose the topic they complete a project on, they will actually think about it and get it done. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+55f1379a84e4,BAC5264E2DCE,They can use their creative side of their brain and come up with a very educational but exciting project idea. They can ask they're friends and family to help. They can also use the internet if they don't find enough real life and personal resources. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6034211be3ca,BAC5264E2DCE,"Then, once the students picked their idea of their project, they can go on various adventures to learn about the topic they need to study ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0acddfebb997,BAC5264E2DCE,"They can ask their parents to go on a vacation or vacations to any area specific to learn about it. When they're in the area they could go on tours of the city or country they're in. They can go see the landscape and learn about the past/history, especially if it's a historical spot. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aed5ec111781,BAC5264E2DCE,"students should be the ones who get to choose what their educational projects are going to be about over their summer break. If they create the topic they will actually get it done knowing that their school didn't give them a boring topic to learn about. They can also go on many crazy and exciting adventures to tour and get information on anything they need. Most importantly they need to have fun because summer is about having the time of your life, but they can also learn about fun and educational topics.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ae1bad085cd1,BAC681996825,There are good benefits and bad benefits of not having a car. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2537b28b82c2,BAC681996825,"With your legs being your transportation to get around the city, allows you to get a new experience of getting around. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5416cd2303f5,BAC681996825,it can also be pretty nerve wrecking knowing you have to walk everywhere you want to go ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d982568a3b4e,BAC681996825,"the more walking you do, the less money your spending ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d78fc1a62bec,BAC681996825,"Having no worries about paying for gas, car notes, tickets, etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+948d03962788,BAC681996825,staying in shape. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c587befe9fb6,BAC681996825,"Walking around to get to where you need to go would get you more than plenty excerise. Nothing like having a nice healthy body, burning calories, and even pounds. Having nice strong and healthy heart and burning off the fat that you put on by doing nothing and being physically active by walking. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8da35bad3cbf,BAC681996825,"Less accidents, car jams, traffic problems, and even car polution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e2a9e07ca5e,BAC681996825,"What parent doesn't want a cleaner air for there children to breathe? Less cars can somehow lead to an safer enviornment. Less car accidents dealing with people texting and driving, which could lead to less possiblities of death maybe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65ba0a5f8b07,BAC681996825,"No one wants to walk everywhere their trying to go, nothing wrong with going for a nice bike ride there. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cbbe2d9e000b,BAC681996825,"Limiting car usage can maybe differ the world, cause less problems, less worries, and the best of all. . . SAVE MORE MONEY! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+db7389879f45,BB4B5D896E96,Have you ever had to do a summer project? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0d4bb7e00f0c,BB4B5D896E96,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+86c67fbd2185,BB4B5D896E96,"students would more likely understand how to do the project, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a2cad72fd9d,BB4B5D896E96,it would be less work for the teachers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d79967f1df31,BB4B5D896E96,there would be a higher chance of students doing the project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f24f0d7fedba,BB4B5D896E96,"
+Although teacher-designed summer project would be more academically challenging for the students, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+18811e0a4c7d,BB4B5D896E96,students are more likely to understand how to do the project if they are able to design it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f2fb9ba045d4,BB4B5D896E96,"For example, when my sister was in tenth grade she did not do her summer project because the teacher did not explain it well and she didn't understand how to do it. This shows that if summer projects were student designed, students would have a better understanding on how to do the project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34f8b3e4288b,BB4B5D896E96,a student-designed summer project would be less work for the teachers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89f8168876af,BB4B5D896E96,"For example, my ninth grade English teacher was so focused on preparing us for our final that she didn't have enough time to design a summer project. This shows that if students were to design their own summer projects, teachers would have less work and more time to focus on grading and teaching. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1097d43c1da,BB4B5D896E96,if students could design their summer project there would be a higher chance of them doing the project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a3294843ece,BB4B5D896E96,"For example, if a teacher made a summer project about researching China but some students prefer to research about Rome, students wouldn't want to do the project because they aren't interested in China. This shows that if students were to design their own project they would make it around their interests and would more likely do the project as well as enjoy it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35bd09944511,BB4B5D896E96,"I encourage you to write a letter to your local school board and inform them on why summer projects should be student-designed. Summer projects should be student-designed because students would more likely understand how to do the project, it would be less work for the teachers, and there would be a higher chance of students doing the project. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+59dc1a345eac,BB5B7EE4A1A6,"In young adult life, such as the high school years, many students lack responsibility. This is because society does not put enough trust in teenagers to make their own choices and decisions; thus, stereotyping a whole generation with negative connotations. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+87cca221c44f,BB5B7EE4A1A6,the summer projects should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1f4709bce10f,BB5B7EE4A1A6,to help better their own generations reputation ,Claim,Effective,,,
+db9052b4bf33,BB5B7EE4A1A6,develop valuable life skills. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2b61755c7527,BB5B7EE4A1A6,"Many student grow up always being told what to do and how to do it. This does not allow for any creativity or original thoughts to be generated all by ones self. For example, when I was a child, my parents would lay out clothes each morning for me to wear to school. Not only did this limit my creativity, it also limited my self identity because I was unable to express myself in what clothes I wear. This so called favor that my parents would do for me caused me to never learn how to dress myself in a reasonable fashion for the appropriate setting. Just like how the students will never know how to design their own projects if the teachers do not put any faith in the students for just this one summer. The teachers will be able to see a students best representation of his or hers creativity and level of learning because they will have something to prove to society. To show everyone that they are able to do things on their own or independently ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cd4e917d3df2,BB5B7EE4A1A6,"The students need to have the teachers and society's trust to exceed what is expected of them because society will never know what these students are capable of if they are never given an opportunity to prove themselves. This will better the generations reputation if done correctly. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5f0cec7a6ad1,BB5B7EE4A1A6,"These students need to be prepared for college and the real world outside of school, such as the work force. For example, if a child wanted to play soccer you would not just sit them in front of a television and watch soccer games. This might be a good way to teach them the general idea of what soccer is but they will never be able to learn the skills that are necessary in the game. That child will never learn how to pass, shoot, kick, or even have the social skills to communicate with his team mates. This goes the same for any other activity. The teachers in this school are treating there students just like this child. If they just give them the summer project and tell them to complete it they will never learn the skills of self-management and creativity that they would develop while design their own summer projects. These are valuable skills that students will need later in their own life time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5310aab18884,BB5B7EE4A1A6,"The most important part of school should be teaching these valuable skills to make the students more independent rather than just the curriculum. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c9746fcdb011,BB5B7EE4A1A6,Some people may believe that the curriculum is the most important part of school and that is why the teachers should be designing the summer projects. They would argue that some students would fail at the task of designing their own projects. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8595c70f745c,BB5B7EE4A1A6,"However, even if the students fail at this task they will learn from the failure. They learn what they did wrong in order to develop more skills and when the next opportunity comes they will not fail. Either way fail or succeed the students learn different types of independent life skills that are very valuable and needed for adult life. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+29b9b147e94d,BB5B7EE4A1A6,", students need to be better prepared for the independence that comes later in their life, whether it is college or the work force, these valuable life skills need to be learned for the ability to succeed in any area of life. For this reason I believe that the summer projects should be designed by the students for the chance to prove there worth and develop key skills that are required in adult life. Do not limit what a student can do based on the stereotypes around their generation. Let students have the opportunity to represent what they know.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+54880bec3879,BBDD46456082,When the author talks about Venus he talks about how it is and what it is like and how it works. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ac086cb3110c,BBDD46456082,Venus is different from Earth but it is the same in some way. It is differnt because of the tempurature and the atmosphere and the surface. The tempurature reaches up to 800 degrees fahrenheit and that is unsurvivable for humans. The surface is bad to it is a hot lava and molten like suface and it can melt most metals. Venuses atmosphere is mainly filled with 97 percent of carbon dioxide. The air pressure is really bad it is strong enough it could crush a submarine like its going down to the deepest part of our oceans. NASA is trying to come up with a way to study Venus with a blimp like vehicle that can float 30 miles up away from Venus and its nasty surface and atmosphere. Even though the tempurature will reach only 170 degrees fahrenhite it is still survivable for humans.       ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+47eedbe6baf3,BBE1713D653B,"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus, its even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric aciod in venus's atmosphere. it is usually 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and sometimes the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet. All thought these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth.
+
+Also venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system. Even though mercury is closer to our sun. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcannoes powerful earthquakes are frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.
+
+NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. For an example some simplified electronics made of slilcon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. These devices were first envisioned in 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during world war II. Modern computers exidting in those days may sound schoking but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.
+
+Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value not only because pf the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+caed4855c7f3,BBE1713D653B,In conclusion venus has many dangers ways and it is very hot planet. its very hard to study  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+653a7fdfc5d1,BBEE06BD484C,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. There is an ongoing debate if these summer projects should be teacher- designed or student- designed. Those that disagree state it's easier on yourself and brings out your own ideas and creativity, but this is not true. Although some may disagree, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c8ae8faa1831,BBEE06BD484C,summer projects should be teacher- designed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a49633c09e22,BBEE06BD484C,The teacher can challenge the students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+939757dd5225,BBEE06BD484C,if I was assigned a project where I can pick my own topic I wouldn't do a lot to where it's hard work. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e00e40012bfe,BBEE06BD484C,the teacher can also prepare you for next year and do the topic about something you're going to learn about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+011ac2b9d4b8,BBEE06BD484C,"Doing a project of my own choice of topic wouldn't help me next year. Also, it lets the teacher see who can do it and who needs more time and help. Every year is different and working on a project designed by the teacher can help you get ready. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88cb1f038b0c,BBEE06BD484C,to have a topic to the subject ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7573605b0c07,BBEE06BD484C,Doing a project about my favorite song wouldn't help me with science ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e8f21158b0a,BBEE06BD484C,A teacher- designed project can also better your work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec9b0f9216d5,BBEE06BD484C,"When your teacher assign a project about a topic your going to learn next year, you will already know about it because you did a project on it ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c5eca89cbc2,BBEE06BD484C,doing summer projects prepare your brain for school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af2aca9d335a,BBEE06BD484C,"Over the summer you can forget things and having a teacher- designed project can help remember. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47e977b29d00,BBEE06BD484C,"Although some may disagree, summer projects should be teacher- designed. This is the case due to better work, prepare you for next year, and challenge students. Those who disagree state it's easier on yourself and bring out your own ideas and creativity, but this is not true. This topic is important because it shows how some schools do better than other schools when they do summer projects. It makes other schools want to prepare their students for their upcoming year ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b240f276b062,BBF34C059226,"The author in the story suggests of the idea of going to venus and studying as
+
+''earth's twin'' ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ff509d6ecc47,BBF34C059226,That with the author's idea of pursuiting to Venus. Even through with the dangers of it by studying to go there does'nt sound too bad to think of ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cef3b57b2bd5,BBF34C059226,Venus is the closed planet to earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c9dfc49f4d7,BBF34C059226,"That people are looking to traval to Mars well Earth,Venus and Mars are neighbor's there is a diffrentce Mars is not as hot as Venus, is closer to the sun. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ebeb3e092f20,BBF34C059226,Venus is some times closer to Earth the Mars is humans have send spacecafts to land on Venus but one thing about the dangers no human shoukd go it would be something to look in too. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+91d31ee4fb92,BBF34C059226,Going to Venus would be hard knoing that no spacecarfts surviced the landing for more than a few hours. Venus is something that is not a good idea knowing that the average is over 800 degrees is nothing to play with just to go to Venus.  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f003d3cc86e2,BC0D9F77A3DA,"Extracurricular activities can be a number of things. From sports, to working on the yearbook, and even serving on the student council, there are a lot of things that qualify as extracurricular activities. It is good for everyone to be part of at least one activity to keep them occupied and stay involved with the school. Doing an extracurricular activity has a lot of benefits, and doing an extracurricular activity is doing yourself a favor. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f161cd1edfda,BC0D9F77A3DA,"Whether it gives you good experience for your future career, helps you develop good leadership and decision-making, or keeps you in shape, the pros of requiring extracurricular activities far outweighs the cons. ",Position,Effective,,,
+70c0248bfa75,BC0D9F77A3DA,One of the extracurricular activities you can choose is playing a sport. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43800accae27,BC0D9F77A3DA,"Sports help you out in a number of ways. They could help you stay in shape. You can make friends or develop stronger bonds with them. They also can be a lot of fun, and pave way for a future career in that sport. There are lots of sports to choose from, so the options are endless! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+000a03cbe6c7,BC0D9F77A3DA,Another way to stay involved with your school is to work on the yearbook. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+148c3bbbc10e,BC0D9F77A3DA,"The yearbook is made annually by students, and is good to put on your resume if you want a career in photography. Helping out with the yearbook actually helps the school too. If students like the yearbook, they will buy it, which gives the school more money to spend on improving itself. You also get to hang out with friends while working on the yearbook, which is always nice. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4127b72d3457,BC0D9F77A3DA,"If those activities dont appeal to you, you could serve on the student council ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d619c557e2ea,BC0D9F77A3DA,Serving on the school council helps develop crucial skills like leadership and decision-making. It is also a very good experience if you want to pursue a career in politics later on in life. The decisions you make while on student council can help out the school a lot. You can improve key areas of the school and make life better for the students who go to the school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df7a43d3228e,BC0D9F77A3DA,"Learning new things about yourself is always good, and extracurricular activities help you do just that. Maybe you're a great hockey player. Maybe you discover a passion for photography you never knew you had by working on the yearbook. Maybe you're actually a great leader. There are so many things you can discover about yourself by participating in extracurricular activities. Things that you would never know about if you didn't try an extracurricular activity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c15f56fd2800,BC22AA8852AD,The counterclaim: Our travels on earth and beyond sold not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. The evidence is in paragraph 6 many reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to or knowledge of venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb46e86c3239,BC22AA8852AD,"In the article ""The challenge of exploring venus"", Mostly talks about venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it could be . ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c1d1deed9e82,BC22AA8852AD,One reason why it's dangerous is because no one have maded to venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+00589ce33b59,BC22AA8852AD,"For example in paragraph 2 in sentence 5 it states, ""Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours"". Another example in paragraph 2 sentence 6 it states, ""maybe the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed2487b63d7e,BC22AA8852AD,A second reason why it's dangerous is that NASA is exprienceing new object to see if they could land in venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ca472f3ec455,BC22AA8852AD,"For example in paragraph 5 in the second sentence it states ""NASA possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus."" A second example on why NASA is using objects is in paragraph five sentence four it states ""A vechicle hovering over venus would avoid to unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6aa6296bf97,BC22AA8852AD,A third reason why it's dangerous is that humans are not believing and wanting to go to venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b4e6a08ebb28,BC22AA8852AD,"For example in paragraph eight it states ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endevors"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+434510ebae90,BC22AA8852AD,"""The challenge of exploring venus"" Is worthy pursuit despite of danger for these reasons, Alstranouts not landing, NASA making a new object to try to land, and humans not wanting to believe what's happeing and wanting to go to venus. I perdict that those were why the author suggest that studying venus could be dangerous. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b45d730253a3,BCA57CE2AFA3,Joining the Seagoing Cowboys program would be a great opperatonuty for you. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+78efb601c932,BCA57CE2AFA3,This would let you see the world in a differnt way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dacc87820f18,BCA57CE2AFA3,You would get to travel the world. See differnt things and go siteseeing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95846f5743fd,BCA57CE2AFA3,This opperatonuty would let you have fun with work and and with your job by working with animails ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5db2f611a09a,BCA57CE2AFA3,this oppertonuty would let you see the world in a differnt way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f159eaacde4e,BCA57CE2AFA3,"It would make you aware of people and people of there other contries and there needs. It might evan lead you closer to makeing something good in this world. It led Luke Bombergers family to do amazing things like hosta number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9303cfd4d62,BCA57CE2AFA3,"this oppertonuty would let you travel the world , see new thing, and meet new people. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0396fa205a17,BCA57CE2AFA3,"On return trips after the animails have been unloaded you can paly games like Baseball and Volleyball games where the animails used to be hosted. Boxing, tabeltennis, fencing, whittiling, reading, and playing games also made it fun and let time pass quickley. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a949395af59,BCA57CE2AFA3,Some people might say it would be to boring to be on a ship in the middle of the sea with nothing to do and they would miss friends and families because it a long trip. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8ede65c6f3b0,BCA57CE2AFA3,On the ship you have jobs and on the return trips you can play games in the stalls where the animails where hosted. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cde70d4da134,BCA57CE2AFA3,They might also say they have no point in doing this. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+faa8b17d06b5,BCA57CE2AFA3,This would be a great oppertunity for anyone who loves farming evan if you don't you could learn a great lesson from this Seagoing Cowboy program. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+232972e0f7e8,BCA57CE2AFA3,going on this trip would be a great oppertonuty for any one. You could get a great life lesson out of this and you could meet new people and see differnt things. you could also have lots of fun on the return trips and with your jobs. You would get to play lots of games. If you get a good oppertonuty take it because most people don't get chances like this.                 ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+423dddc72638,BCEBA1D60DFD,The authors suggustin that we should study Venus is worh it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f907ec237cf4,BCEBA1D60DFD,even though it will be really hard to get anyhing back from there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13422f548ba1,BCEBA1D60DFD,"becasue there is only drownes that could go so that they can pick up rocks""safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on good ""
+
+conditions becasue most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense almosphere "" even though we are able to have drownes go there we wont be able to bring any of them back with rocks or some air from that planet. The other reson for them would be that they would have to send real people to go and get some samples but that would be to dangerus ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5928df781dab,BCEBA1D60DFD,"""scientist seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get up close"" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+befdb33b826a,BCEBA1D60DFD,despite being hard for them to try and study Venus. The authors suggetion on the story is very help full i can see why some peolpe would like to keep on going with there owm this time. even though people might not want to look any closser to Venus i belive it would be alot helpfull if we learn alot more of what is out there in space. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2a67fa532166,BD0D555216AB,Students will be way more benifited if summer school projects were to be student-designed instead of teacher designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1cf7e9def05e,BD0D555216AB,Allowing for student to design their own project will allow them to explore and learn how to do projects on their own. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d221a574419e,BD0D555216AB,This will allow them to be more independent and responsible on doing projects on their own and managing their time to do school work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24ce5ba84dc3,BD0D555216AB,It also be way more fun then doing a teacher-designed project ! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c957e1971aa3,BD0D555216AB,If students were to do teacher-designed projects then they will be guided to do a better project overall and will learn stuff that can actually benifit them in the coming year ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+59967da2fce5,BD0D555216AB,It can also refresh their memory on material they already learned and keep them engaged on education and not on wasting time. Also if the the summer projects were teacher-designed then. If students were to a teacher-designed project than it will fit into a criteria where it is easier to grade. This will allow the teacher to grade them quickly and give feedback to improve the students knowledge and to help solve the mistakes. Also if students did a teacher-designed project than they can have better instructions making it easier and more quickly to get the project done faster allowing them to have a better summer. But it will also keep them engage with school work because it was a teacher-design and the material on it should be instructed and given from the teacher. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26212ef85adc,BD0D555216AB,The students will be able to have more freedom when making a student-designed project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62bb0fa8acf3,BD0D555216AB,"With more freedom students can explore subjects that they don't know about, or want to know more about. This can also make students get more creative with the project when it comes to design or topic that others may find interesting. If students had more freedom with their project allowing them to be creative and showing the teachers what they can do could benifit them because the teacher can give the student more opportunities when doing future projects. Also if the school some very creative project than the student can be recommended to events or major schools in the future. Also when giving students more freedom it can allow them to express themselves or maybe make a point when doing a project on their own. Also when doing a teacher-designed project then students will fell more restrained and more like they are forced to a project. If students had to do their own designed project than they would probably do it more willingly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cd18eed9190d,BD0D555216AB,when allowing the student to their own student-designed project it can make them more responsible and independent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0951b95fd751,BD0D555216AB,"This will make the students more independent because they will have to the project on their own with no guide or instruciton on how to do it making them do it by themselves. And of course responsible because the student is responsible to get the project done and to turn it in with their own design. Letting a student their own project can help them because could get them to do their work and use their own knowledge. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+213b19edff3f,BD0D555216AB,If the students were to do their own student-design project than they will have fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4e033ee8976,BD0D555216AB,If they are having fun than they will be more engaged on the project and interested allowing them to do better. When they have fun doing there project than it's a more enjoyable experience. It will also teach them how to manage time during the summer to get their project done. Also the student will have all the summer to design their own project allowing them to above and beyond and do something very creative that can influence others and impress the teacher. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ed0ee024558,BD0D555216AB,Overall a student-design project would be better because it allows the student to explore and have freedom with their design and project allowing them to create cool and complex projects. This would also make student responsible and independent because they have to make their own design project. And overall it would be very fun allowig the student to be engaged with their project and really get into their project making it better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eef333a93ac1,BD195459F3B9,the face is just a natural land form and not something created by Aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bbf5ec770342,BD195459F3B9,we have done real research on the Landform ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f280a3a38abe,BD195459F3B9,Not only that but when we took the pictures we used our camera’s absolute maximum resolution so it would be as clear as possible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff52d9b5391d,BD195459F3B9,Plus the evidence has changed ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4ad2596655a0,BD195459F3B9,"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. So we know that the planet is changing and thats how we know that the landform isn't created by Aliens. Plus we have a Surveyor which is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. The number one way we know it is a land form and not something created by Aliens is because “As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,” he added. “So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!”. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92d5acfad40c,BD195459F3B9,"Also we have pictures from 1976, 1998, and 2001 that shows its change and that it's a landform. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f876c180c067,BD3AE65B1740,Luke wants other people to join the seagoing cowboy program. He wants people to join it so that persons life would change ,Position,Adequate,,,
+69f77ddad9c6,BD3AE65B1740,he wants to help the people that doesnt have enough food or their house got destroyed ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1f6a49cde86,BD3AE65B1740,It will help you because when we are done giving our will to that person he or she will want to help other people too. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c91cbed681eb,BD3AE65B1740,he could take care of any animal that is damaged or hurt and he will take care of them when they are shipped overseas. It will be an opportunity of a lifetime for your animal because we will treat them well and give them enough food for them to survive. When you see people treating the animals they will want to be part of the group so ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee5272fe1b3b,BD3AE65B1740,he can help other people or animals ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5bfa487d509,BD3AE65B1740,It will be an opportunity of a lifetime because you get to travel overseas ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3a90cbc5999,BD3AE65B1740,probably see the place that you always dreamed of going to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f73e1cd66093,BD3AE65B1740,Also you might want to have the animal you were taking care of because you worked hard on taking care of it. Maybe when your children grow up they will want to be part of the Seagoing Cowboy program ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1d00df9f0bee,BD3AE65B1740,When you return from the trip overseas you will never forget about it because you will want to tell the whole world about how much fun you had. When you tell the people how much fun you had hey will want to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Also on the trip back home you unload all the animals you can play volleyball games and other games that will help pass the time. Also you will always remember the trip of a lifetime ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3a84931fbcd2,BD7F5D94AFED,"Would having car free cities be easier for everyone, or would it make a huge impact on our society? It could go from commuting executuve or fewer soccer moms. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c7ffd5e32ade,BD7F5D94AFED,"Driveways, home garages, and street parking and forbidden in the experiment of the outskirts on the nee district. In a place called Vauban's streets are completly ""Car-free"". The only places that are not car free are downtown near the tram. You can only have two places to park and those two places are home, and large garages only at the edge of the developement it costs $40,000. Fifty-seven percent sold a car to move here, and seventy percent of families do not own a car. They say ""When I had a car i was always tense. Immuch happier this way"". Suburbs have linchpin called automobiles. Up to fifty percent in some car- intensive areas in the U.S.. and up to twelve percent of green house gas emissions in Europe. A home to 5,500 residents withing a rectangular square mile, it may be the most advanced experiment in a low-car suburban life. They say "" All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change"". A fast-growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the U.S. are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars. The EPA is promoting a ""car reduced"" communities, and legislatrors are acting cautiously.
+
+Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city, after days of near-record pollution. Odd and even numbered plates were threatened to keep there cars home or forced to lay of fine of $31. Just about 4,000 drivers were fined. Sixety percent of congestion was down. China is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Taax policy favors Diesels over gasoline. Sixty-seven percent of diesels make up vehiclals, compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in Wetern Europe. There is typically more smog in Paris. There were one hundred and forty seven micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter, and this is compared to one hundred and fourteen and 79.7 reuters found. According the the BBC, public transit was free of charge from friday to monday. The smog had cleared enought monday for the ruling french party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.
+
+Millions of Colonbians hiked, skated, biked, or took busses to work during a car free day yesterday. Cars have been banned for 3 years now in colombia, there are only taxis, and busses left there a seven million people in that city. The goal was to promote alternitive transportation and reduce smog, violatoors faced a tenty five dollar fine. They said ""The rain hasnt stopped people from participating"". ""It;s a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution"". Cali and Valledupar, had joined the event. ""These people are generating a revolutionary change"". It has been seen to see one hundred and eighteen miles of bicycle paths. New restaurants and upscale shopping districts have ctopped up. Parks ans sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city. Rush hour restrictions have dramaticlly cut traffice. Uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fb1972c2b547,BD7F5D94AFED,This is what i think should happen with out society. Car-free days would be a new thing for everyone ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2722e39f92ae,BD7F5D94AFED,We have some pretty l,azy people in the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+be64661dc62b,BD891970FC4A,"Aliens are real, Frank I'm telling you. The aliens made that face on Mars. Why do you think that, Grayson? No one can step on Mars. If a person steps on Mars, they will die. No one has ever been to Mars, Still to this day. Are you sure about what you are saying? I'm sure about this. Aliens live in the galaxy. They can step on any planet whenever they want to and not die. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d593b26a7368,BD891970FC4A,Well I have something to say. Aliens do not exist. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ce49b7fe5d2,BD891970FC4A,"If they were real, they would have took over the world. They would have been making us do work every single day. f they came here they would probaly have killed us by now. Have they killed us, have they started making us do work? No, they haven't. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f76f14e609b,BD891970FC4A,"Grayson? Yes, Sir? I heard you and Kevin talking about how aliens made that face on mars. Both of you are wrong. You were right about the no aliens part, but everything else was wrong. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+706f91cf19e8,BD891970FC4A,We just now figured out that it was just another Martian mesa. It is common enough in Cydonia. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c10f2139c9ff,BD891970FC4A,"When we took the picture, I have got a lot of e-mails saying ""what is that thing?"" I even got a e-mail from Michael Bay saying that he is going to use that image for a movie. This stuff is crazy! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2e2fb87973f7,BD891970FC4A,The picture is accually the Martian of a butte or mesa. It's common across the American west. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+29a0b19f30da,BD891970FC4A,I hope we can find more stuff like that. Me too that was a wierd experience.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4161c4c93870,BDA93024CF81,Ths technology is has helping the humans by their invention over the time. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+418b7f1050bb,BDA93024CF81,"The software that detect how people are feeling, while they are try to hide their emotions ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e26a62e226e,BDA93024CF81,The system is called the Facial Action Coding Systemis now on variety of industries. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+414b1da7239c,BDA93024CF81,"It classifien on the basic emotion like happy, surprise, anger, scary, and sad. The computer it structure by a 3-D model of the face to detect their feeling. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b3be3f18b783,BDA93024CF81,"When you are happy and smile looking on the computer it going to detect, so how has you been. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+538bd90e74e3,BDA93024CF81,"In school, is better and helping in students doing better on their grades so, facing to the screen of your classroom that students if they are boring or just confused on their class. Showing student they don'tlike the class by their teaching. Also students it just wanted it to be an interesant topic on each of their class. It also developing wat to communicate with humans and computers. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01f1f283dcc3,BDA93024CF81,"It help us by recognize the face of our peer, ""For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c7799ff2289,BDA93024CF81,"Of course, most of us would have troubles actually describing each facial triat conveys happy, worries, etc."". Just the computer can know the feeling you feel. if we face with an angry face but meanwhile it showing a happy face to us.""They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forces one"". By identifity a real smile not a fake one its muscle it go the cheek. A fake smile the mouth its stretched sideway ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+204033021db8,BDA93024CF81,"Is describe how the computer can detect on a real face or just on a painted face descrbing of the facial movement were. The muscle of the facial is not expresses their emotion, and also can structure of their face with a smile. By feeling other their emotinos it can also us feel it,as just of creating an emotions. Describing a face is can't lie because of their different muscles, is just telling the truth of your self. It just to communicate between humans and computers with their feeling. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+626746e8b290,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"In ""The Challenge of exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despit the dangers it presents ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c9b33ca0b3d3,BDAAE2AE7BA8,One that really stood out was when he said that Venus was a lot like earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e709d267f97,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"It has mountens, vallys, hills and exetra. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+beaa0c617c56,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"They said one way we could get closer and see more is if we sdend a ""vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape"". ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+563946a94bb8,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"I thought that was a smart idea becaue if the ground is to hop to stand on and be on, having something hover over it is a grat Idea. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90f6df344ac6,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"They also said that Cenus is like our ""sister plant"". They say this becaus it has proven to be one of the ""most Earth-like planer in out solar system"" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a9e7da94e80b,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"That is also a cool fact. I also read in the story that Venus is not the closest to the sun but yet it still is the hotest planet. In passage 4 it states,
+
+""The planet (venus) has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar future"". This is a intesting fact ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef50227d9e82,BDAAE2AE7BA8,"my question to the auther would be , ""Doesnt Mars have rocks and mountens? So, can mars be a sister planet to Earth as well or am I wrong?"" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d7bb28c5d99f,BDC4070CF21E,"Summer assignments can be very beneficial in ensuring that students are continuously learning, but the question at hand is, should students personalize their summer assignments or should a teacher-designed standardized copy be given to every student? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6b0b473bf584,BDC4070CF21E,I believe that students should be able to design their own summer assignments ,Position,Effective,,,
+62f514c94809,BDC4070CF21E,"only the student knows what they need to improve on, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+eef163cb62f8,BDC4070CF21E,teachers may attempt to take advantage of this opportunity by assigning a tremendous amount of work ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5e4b728fee12,BDC4070CF21E,one standardized paper does not facilitate each individual students needs or learning styles. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e239537e9d29,BDC4070CF21E,"some may believe that it is better for the teacher to design the assignment, because the teacher knows what students need to improve on, so the teachers would provide students with exactly what they need to practice. They might also believe that if a student was to design the assignment, they would purposely make it simple and deny themselves the opportunity to learn. They may also agree that teachers should make the assignments because the teacher is in a position of power in the classroom. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+48ce7d8745b9,BDC4070CF21E,"Although, the teacher is responsible for teaching the class, the student is responsible for knowing which areas they need improvement on. Every student is different, one student may find challenging, another may find it easy. For example, in my geometry class, most students find proportions simple, whereas I find them rather complex and challenging. If I were to design my own summer assignment for geometry, I would include a lot of proportions to ensure I get the needed practice. This is just one of the example of how students know where they need improvement and how a student can help promote their own success. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1d35316e3ae0,BDC4070CF21E,"Teachers are meant to assist students in excelling at the necessary curriculum in order to pass the course, yet some times they overbear students with work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b0b48f2efab2,BDC4070CF21E,"Some students learn better visually, so their summer assignments should include many videos, some students learn better kinetically, so their summer assignments should include hands on activities, and others learn better by hearing, so their summer assignments should include audio material such as pod casts. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+700dc776b45f,BDC4070CF21E,"I believe that students should be able to design their own summer assignments because, they are the only ones capable of knowing what they personally need to improve on, teachers may try to take advantage of the summer assignment and assign too much work, and everyone learns differently so students should be able to tailor the summer assignment to fit their learning styles. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8808627fa613,BDCD981437BB,"Students strongly dislike summer assignments. It is a known fact, and completing them is the last thing on a child's agenda. One thing students do enjoy, is choosing everything themselves. Teacher's have a dramatic affect on a student's learning, most of the time being beneficial, but students tend to procrastinate on assignments that require a large amount of effort to work on. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+86299005849f,BDCD981437BB,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be56762931b7,BDCD981437BB,"students are able to work with comfortable material, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d4d3eddff869,BDCD981437BB,"personalize the project to their liking which would make them more eager to complete it, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+01d26f19768e,BDCD981437BB,have the ability to produce less time-consuming projects that can make room for summer activities during the break. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5d110b03059d,BDCD981437BB,"There are beliefs that teachers should be monitoring and producing summer work for the students themselves. Supposedly, the perspectives of the teachers are valuable, and the projects produced would be putting a massive amount of pressure than of being produced by the students themselves. Although teachers do have high standards and expect the best amount of effort possible, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ab70c4ffc92e,BDCD981437BB,"students know what best suites their own knowledge and what levels they can withstand. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a357a87b979c,BDCD981437BB,"The Great Gatsby , a book that takes place in the 1920s, is about a rich man and the times of the stock market crash, among other things. Gatsby is a mysterious man who is hard to come by. Gatsby throws parties in his enormous mansion, and everyone human possible is invited. As time passes, he stops throwing these parties, and he is not heard from for a significant amount of time. The man could not withstand the massive amount of pressure of the parties; every individual expects the greatest out of Gatsby, but the stress that it all brings him results in isolation, especially with the Great Depression playing a large role. If students have the ability to produce their own projects and not have such high standards coming from a teachers standpoint, the students will have less stress and be able to find work that is compatible with their abilities ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a56585c7cf4,BDCD981437BB,"A great example of this circumstance would be from the book
+
+Divergent , written by Veronica Ross. In this novel, the main character, Tris, undergoes a significant change in her life; switching factions. The system does not choose for the individuals, every individual has the right to choose accordingly among a set of factions. The ability that one has to make the decision for themselves allows them to be comfortable with a future lifestyle that results in new friends, family, and the way of life. Students being able to personalize how they are going to perform the project, whether or not it will involve partners, and the form of work given will result in students being at a higher level of comfort than if a teacher were to produce the project top to bottom, not knowing if students will be satisfied or comfortable. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+89acc7785da7,BDCD981437BB,"Students have the tendency to not to things if told by another individual, but when the idea is introduced by oneself, the individual is more inclined to do it.
+
+The Hunger Games is a novel that displays a similar effect; being based off of a numerous amount of decisions that could either end up in an individual's death, or survival, a certain scene in this book depicts the choosing of a weapon. The main character, Katniss, chooses a bow and arrow, being a weapon that the character has a great strength in and has a higher chance in succeeding with it. Having the ability to choose and having a personalized approach to the task makes one's task more likely to be completed with great excellence, especially if the individual personalizes the project to aid their strengths rather than their weaknesses. A teacher would not be able to identify a student's weaknesses, resulting in a weaker result than anticipated. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+900db52fa690,BDCD981437BB,"Summer break is called a break for a reason, and if teachers assign projects that are more time consuming than anticipated, the time that students are given would be wasted. For example, an individual that brings similarity to the topic is Frederick Douglass. Frederick Douglass is an inspirational figure in America's History. The man wants the abolition of slavery. By fighting for his beliefs and going through excruciating pain by his slaveholders, Douglass becomes more and more passionate about gaining the freedom that the man and every other slave deserves. With the ability to control one's own life and decisions, one will have more freedom and space to breathe. Giving students the opportunity to customize the projects to a more time conservative approach aids in both the learning experience because the work is still getting done accordingly, and there is still time reserved for a summer break that the students deserve and should be able to fully enjoy. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+425816a4caae,BDCD981437BB,"projects given during the summer should be designed by the students themselves because students then have the ability to work with material that best fits their comfort zone, customize a satisfactory project that persuades students to being more eager to complete it, and have the ability to make projects that consume less time, providing a larger window for students to use for summer activities. Students should be able to have freedom when it comes to their summer, and if given the opportunity to customize the work they receive during this time period, the results would be nowhere near disappointing. Making summer projects student-designed is a must.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+57fd04db6a56,BE1F20C5B099,The advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+19c030134240,BE1F20C5B099,"it helps the envirornment to stay healthy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0dfa4d7c6e8d,BE1F20C5B099,it helps bring the rate of high car usage down ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50a21a62569e,BE1F20C5B099,"lets people take bikes, skates, and ect. and so people can be more actice, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+acb2c3978c95,BE1F20C5B099,"cars have harmful chemicals, and gases that is bad for the air we breath. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cca35d0b1f73,BE1F20C5B099,it helps the envirornment to stay healthy because with so many countries with over populated cities have alot of cars which causes smog. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e82af3d1b393,BE1F20C5B099,"Like in Vauban Germany they have gave up on there cars so they have baned cars, and that most of the population has got rid of their car, and or sold them to stay in Vauban which has a population of 5,500 residents. The people now in Vuaban walk of side walks, and are more actice most of the citizens like it that way. which that is a good way to get over car is to use bikes, skateboards, and ect. So that people can be more active, and social. It is also good that they do that so they can get a exercise than just sitting in a car, and driving to a location. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc76d5b9afb9,BE1F20C5B099,"it help prevents harmful chemicals and gases thar are bad for the air we breath because if we keep polluting the streets with cars those harmful and deadly chemicals, and gases go to the atmosphere and come back to us as air we breath, and those are not good things to put in your body. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7af09d2f98a,BE1F20C5B099,"The cause of over populated cities like in paris, or bogota have cause alot of smog. So now what they have to lower the smog is that they have days when they dont drive cars, and that if you rode a car you would get fined. In Colombia Bogota they have time where that the people didnt mind not driving cars, and they would hike, bike or even take the bus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c6e6dcfb523,BE1F20C5B099,"the advantages of limiting car usage is that it helps the envirorment to stay healthy, help bring people together and make them more active by taking bikes, skates, and ect. and also cars have harmful chemicals, and gases that is bad for the air we breath. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+865f5e538d39,BE243683124A,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1f2c155db6ce,BE243683124A,. Teacher should not assign project during summer break ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c72787d2d67b,BE243683124A,students will forget and will become stressed out ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38d4092353d3,BE243683124A,", students may have other summer actives such as Generic_School sports or camps ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0170d09c2c2,BE243683124A,all in all students just need a break away from learning. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c82867ce9cc5,BE243683124A,"
+To begin, students should not be assigned summer project because students will forget and will become stressed out ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+79dc40f7384c,BE243683124A,"We as students assume a lot from our teacher throughout that 11 months we are in school, we do not need a summer project during our three months of summer vacation. For example, my friend Generic_Name, had to read two books and write a six page essay about each books, Generic_Name was so stressed due to the fact she forgot about the papers till the last month. Generic_Name had taken several vacation that summer with her family and never really had any down time to read and write a paper on the stories. This is a prime example of why students should not have summer project assigned to them. Another example of how summer projects could be stressful is, my brother Generic_Name. Generic_Name had to write a play for English and didnt get reminded about it till the day before school was back in. Generic_Name stressed himself out to the point where he had to go to the ER because it was so my stress of trying to get his summer assignment done on time. Summer project can be very stressful on many students and also many students may forget about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+011d12664c33,BE243683124A,"Secondly, students should not be assigned summer project because they may have other summer actives planned ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4189e41cebe,BE243683124A,"For example, my friend Generic_Name, had a lot of actives and things should wanted to do over the summer such as, getting a job, playing sports, and taking trips. Generic_Name could not fit all that and school work in her plans. Generic_Name of course did not want to start off the school year with a bad grade but she also had some personal things she wanted to achieve that summer. PROPER_NAME made some adjustments to her summer plan so that she could get the work done but had to miss out on getting a job this summer. We as students all have things to do just like adults. For instant, my mom as a child was the oldest sister and had to always watch her younger siblings when her mom was at work. ""Watching younger kids may be difficult sometimes,"" she said even with the very little down time she had she wanted to go out with friends and play basketball. The school work that was assigned to her took away her time of doing what she loved when she was not watching her siblings. Summer assignment take over kids summer that why we should not be assigned them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b2a7deee49f,BE243683124A,"Lastly, students should not be assigned summer project because they need a break from learning all in all ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d87e42e69152,BE243683124A,"We as students are always told, "" you learn something new each and everyday."" Learning take place in our everyday life. For instant, students with jobs learn how to do mental math when customers purchase something. Learning does not just come from our teachers, we are taught by just the people we are around during our summer break. Summer break should be our time to have fun and do what we want, not having to deal with a school project. Another example students just need a break from learning is that we are in school for a 11 months, we assume a lot of great information from our teachers throughout that time period. We as students should not have to have a assignment to keep us learning, we learn from each other and many other people in this world. These are some of the reasons students do not need assignments over summer break. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66f0707a0d16,BE243683124A,"In conclusion, some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Students do not need projects over summer break because students will forget and will become stressed out, students may have other summer actives planned, and all in all students just need a break from learning.I personal feel like students learn enough in the 11 month that they are in school. Summer projects is just something that getting in the way of students having fun and letting loose once in a while.Summer break should be our one time to forget about school for 3 months, lets keep it that way! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+af36e59d6f09,BE24907D6684,"From Luke's experieance he know's that he is lucky to life in america. And that other people in other countires don't get a chance to live a good life. So Luke let people from other places stay at his home so they could go to a good school. And that awarness stayed with him for the rest of his days. Like he said it was an opportunity of a life time.
+
+Luke had just graduated from high school and was working 2 part time jobs. One at the bank. One at the grocery. Untill one day his friend Don Reist came along and asked him to be a ""Seagoing Cowboy"" with him. He knew this was the oppertunity of a life time. So obivisly he went.
+
+In August 1995, World War ll was over in Europe, many countries were gone. So luke and the other Seagoing Cowboys were sent there with food, animals, and more. Luke and his friend were shiped over seas to help as part of the UNRRA. He was shocked to see all the countries ruined. There was nothing left!
+
+After all of that he was shiped to China with lots of suplies. One his way he got to see ols castles. He also traveled down the Panama Canal. The aniamls keep Luke very busy. They needed to be feed 3 times a day. They played lots of ball games to pass the time. Like volleyball and table tennis.
+
+Being a
+
+Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure to Bomberger. On all over his nine missions he learned that he was very lucky. LIke he said,""It made me more aware of people of other countries and thier needs."" And the awareness stayed with him, he became a host for international students and exchage visitors for many years. That oppertunity chaged Luke Bomberger's live forever! We are very lucky to live in the USA becuase we have many more oppertunities the anyone else does.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a1f6e9a164cb,BE464F52C63D,have you ever done at least one extracurricular activity at your school before ? i have never had a no expedients in doing a extracurricular activity before ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c7c0fe6635d2,BE464F52C63D,i think my school should make students do extracurricular activity at school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+db869c2d9b6e,BE464F52C63D,it will be a good way to have more movement in your body and learning new things to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+370c876e6e36,BE464F52C63D,not always sitting and copping down notes but its not always boring doing those things but maybe having extracurricular activity at my school could be a good thing for all the students so they could have something to do instead of shitting down doing nothing and just being lazy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+adb4adf0e320,BE464F52C63D,i support this division that the principal is making because students could learn how to make new friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b2f0d81239c,BE464F52C63D,"students can learn how to talk to one an other and can learn how to do things as a team making new friends isnt always a bad thing to do when making a new friends they could show you new things that you have never done or speak laggugis you have never spoke or food you have never seen before thats why when you make new friends you might just learn new things, students should communicate with more people because it could take them to so may places when they learn how to communicate to other people in the world and not always to the same people like your friends it really import that students at a young age should learn how to talk to other people without being shy. and when communicating to people thats how to make new friends,, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a75611199cd1,BE464F52C63D,team work is a good thing to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4501c7e2be98,BE464F52C63D,it will teach you hoe to work as a team and not be alone it will teach you hoe to talk to one an other and also make you learn that you dont always have to do things alone also make new friends team work make people closer people they help each other when they need help on something and if you dont like to do team work things you should at least give it a chance because if you dont gibe things first chances how are you gonna know if you like it or not. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f5408a3ecbb5,BE464F52C63D,this would be good for the students because they could talk to more people they dont know and they can do more active activities and learn how to work together as a team ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+58b2be1d9049,BE58ABE09429,"A UFO lands in your front yard. Apart from the screaming, you hear beeps and boops. You turn to the side and see an Alien standing in your doorway. He opens his mouth and a loud alarm sound comes out. You open your eyes and then realize it was all a dream. That's the only reasonable explanation for you seeing a UFO or an alien. To this day scientist have not encountered signs of life on any other planet. So what makes you think aliens could have created the face on Mars? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+430eb98e1c81,BE58ABE09429,"Two decades and a half ago scientist discovered a face like shape on Mars. It was about two miles long. Scientist claimed it was staring at the cameras, but there was nothing surrounding it. No power tools, or hammers, not even a few sculpting tools. How would aliens create such a thing? With alien-y tools? Magic powers maybe? No, because it was a natural formation ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7f1ee33ae2a,BE58ABE09429,"Scientist figured out it was just another Martian mesa, which are frequent around the Cydonia. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d04f5fe773a,BE58ABE09429,"According to the article the only thing different about this one was that it ""had unusual shawdows make it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh."" Which made people go wild. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+17810263d989,BE58ABE09429,"When Mars' face started its fifteen minutes of fame it became a beloved ""pop icon."" It was featured in movies, books, and radio talk shows. It ""haunted grocery checkout lines"" for years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f849e88b74ad,BE58ABE09429,"people, mostly conspiracy theorists, started thinking ""What if aliens formed it?"" Some scientist even started to believe that it was an alien artificat. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+27b0091f3ad3,BE58ABE09429,"So more research was done. Scientist took more pictures, which were ten times sharper than the first ones, and stutdied them. Discovering, the obivious, that it was a natural landform.
+
+There was dissapointment all over the place, not only for the people, but scientist too. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+060e5e626ac2,BE58ABE09429,"It was a mesa, a natural landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8574ecf7a7ca,BE58ABE09429,"It was even compared to the ""MIddle Butte in the Snaler River Plain of Idaho"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+755e24f8c3bc,BE58ABE09429,Since then the popularity of the face has gone downhill. Maybe one day it'll resurface on the social media as a funny meme that teens will talk about for two weeks. Tragic.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+451b9932e6d6,BE80D73EC131,"The education system is designed around the process of preparing children for successful living in society, whether that is pursuing higher education or entering the working world. In reality, students are unlikely to actually use most of the information taught to them during primary education, so school is a method of building skills that can be used for life rather than facts and ideas that are actually necessary. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7c8a5875a473,BE80D73EC131,"When examining a summer project, it can be assumed that learning is encouraged for the purpose of keeping these necessary skills free from decay, so these projects should be student-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+995261cca9f3,BE80D73EC131,"they hone important skills regardless of the origin of their design, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+517f50a963d5,BE80D73EC131,"give students a sense of freedom and responsibility, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b55be8b1d114,BE80D73EC131,encourage children to learn information that they are actually interested in. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bf1ff38375e6,BE80D73EC131,"If a project is to be completed during the summer, it is unlikely that the information that the student must learn is specific to one area. If the knowledge is going to be general, then the focus of the research is unimportant, due to the fact that the basis of the project is to build skills rather than to build knowledge. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+51c8558cfc92,BE80D73EC131,"This increase in responsibility will create better results from most students, because they must put more effort into the project to not only earn a good grade, but to also earn a sense of accomplishment from a well-done project that they solely created. The stress that this causes can also be a motivating factor that interrupts the natural process of procrastination that most students fall victim to during their summer break. Student-designed projects will create, or at least improve, a child's sense of accomplishment and self-fulfillment, an area that is widely ignored in the educational field. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4de03daa5642,BE80D73EC131,"Children are often pressured to identify their interests from an early age, and the common overlook made by schools is that children are not often given opportunities to explore new things, and are rarely given a chance to make decisions based on what they want. They will produce better results when given freedom and are made to feel like their opinion actually makes a difference. If a student has interest in one academic field but not another, it would make no sense to stifle their passion and have them create a project that is just mediocre compared to encouraging their interest and receiving a spectacular product. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dfd3baf1d395,BE80D73EC131,"Referring to the building of skills mentioned before, a worker who is passionate about their career is going to be leagues more productive than a worker who is not. Primary school is about building academic skills rather than the accumulation of facts and is about creating a passion for learning in students. For these reasons, schools have no reason not to allow summer projects to be designed by students.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e3fb333ba6aa,BE9881C4920A,"The ways emontions work is the way we are feeling at that exact moment. We may feel sad, depreesed, angry, happy, excited, or just fantastic. Emotions is how we express ourselves. Emotions can do with a lot of things love, care, affection ect. Emotions is just how people coupe with things like depression & things like that.
+
+""FACS"" Is ""Facial Action Coding System"" It can tell how people emotions are & how they are feeling at that moment. The system can just look at you & tell you how you are feeling but by percentages. It can 10% sad 85% depressed & 5% hungry thats how their scanners work 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8be823916b7a,BE9881C4920A,Their technology is like te best in the world klike very hi-tech in this matter for thm to see how you are feeling is very amazing & can do magineficent things in this world ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e644d6a59eb7,BEAA8D8A3EFD,"HEY YOU!, you should join the seagoing cowboy program ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dbe94566a518,BEAA8D8A3EFD,If you would like travelling mabe you hould go with ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af8ab3976017,BEAA8D8A3EFD,if you like contestes and roff stuff you should go with. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c0c12766d10,BEAA8D8A3EFD,if you like horuses you should go with ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c401243d21a,BEAA8D8A3EFD,"You can see excavated castle in Crete and panama canal in on the way to china and acropolis in Greece. Also explorer Europe and China , gondola ride Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Also fed, gron, muck stales that the horses were in. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fe0f4cf46cf,BEAA8D8A3EFD,"You can find fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. You can play baseball, volleyball games in empty holds where animals were. Also table-tennis tournamennts, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games to pass the time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf8dbb2b430e,BEAA8D8A3EFD,You can also help people because the war put them to rounes and the animals will help them live. Also saves people from dieing and starving. You need to be strong and kind and helpful. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc60ce0aa292,BEAA8D8A3EFD,That is why you sould be a seagoing cowboy.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2f84ccbc7738,BF070C66EE96,"There is alot of advantages to limiting cars. Is there disadvantages? Yes, there is, but limiting cars can also be dangerous, well because the Law Enforcements needs cars and so does the Fire Department or even hospitals. The Law Enforement needs cars to catch criminals faster, and the Fire Departments need cars so they can save us from fires and to save cats from trees, how do they even climb up there? who knows, and the hospital needs them to save patients or to get them to the hospital faster so doctors can save them, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+740b03f395b3,BF070C66EE96,i personally think its a great idea to have limited cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+61d9d0332eb6,BF070C66EE96,"alot of people would lose their jobs due to limited cars, such as mechanics, car dealers, etc. mechanics will go out of business because of no business and so will the car dealers, and if cars dealers dont sell many cars, the company might go out of business too, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e5a5f735b4bd,BF070C66EE96,its good because they might think of building better cars like the hybrid so we wont have much pollution or wont have to use natural gas. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7f0bfdd4e1ab,BF070C66EE96,"In the suburbs of Germany 70 percent of Vauban's families dont own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. ""when i had a car i was always tense. Im much happier this way,"" said Heidrun Walter a resident in the suburb. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+717db6495fd0,BF070C66EE96,it is much more peaceful and quiet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+379c3c26690a,BF070C66EE96,"""the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor"" this sentence from the ""Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"" explains that it is very peaceful because theres no noise, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+933b79f802c1,BF070C66EE96,no pollution and much more healthier people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa24d2ecdc3a,BF070C66EE96,"because they ride bikes everywhere and walk alot, and theres no pollution so theres probably people who dont have breath in nasty air of cars. Even the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities, and legislators are even starting to do the same. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c75ba85e3967,BF070C66EE96,"People that have no cars most likely walk alot and ride bikes, or even run, well because of that the amount of stress people have is probably very low, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad420af152d3,BF070C66EE96,"because of low stress people are happier, and thats because excersize relieves stress and even reduce headaches or other health problems ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40b10dba0fdd,BF070C66EE96,the death rate will go decrease ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b48f00c6047f,BF070C66EE96,"because there will less car accidents, and car accidents are the numer one reason of death and the United States. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83cc1693574f,BF070C66EE96,"In Bogota they were in their third year where cars were banned but only buses and taxis were permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. Their goal is to promote alternative tranportation to reduce nasty smog and violators faced a $25 fines, the turnout of this was large, despite the gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers. ""The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,"" said the Mayor of Bogota ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccda741b3dc2,BF070C66EE96,"the advantages of limited cars are great and the people of Car-less cities or areas are much happier without them, people are healthier, less stressed and even have less health problem due to it, but who will save the cats from climbing trees? maybe they wont climb it because of no pollution or scary car noises.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85f19564b1df,BF2B46872736,Im actually against the value of using technology to read students emotional expressions because thats would be a vialation of how you feel or like about something or someone. I think if you going use technology to calculate someones emotion they should aleast do it and keep it private. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b16506f8e45f,BF2B46872736,"Im going to be telling you a little bit about why using technology to read student emotion is bad. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+e550f3700704,BF2B46872736,"First of all i am against using this technology because, In the passage it says Faces dont lie and it can tell when someone is inmatating a fake smile and i dont really think that is true sometimes faces do lie. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d37f24184cc1,BF2B46872736,I honestly think that being able to read student emotion is awsome in all but its kinda personal. i dont think people want other people know about their emotions. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d45d2f08b62,BF2B46872736,i also think that if this technology is used people will probably become addicted to it and it will probably start getting on people nerves ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdd811d98b0c,BF2B46872736,In the passage it states that when a student becomes bored and confused Dr. huang predicts that it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+945067c0de9f,BF2B46872736,In conclusion use this technology will probably effect people thoughs and emotions. It will also effect how people feel towards one they care about it will cause a whole lot of misunstands confustion effection and unsterstanding. i think that using a computer technology to calculate someone emotion is bad for the enviroment and if we just ramdomly add technology in the world to know people emotions it will get crazy and out of hand. These are all the reasons why i am against use technology to know people's emotion.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ae8da03c101b,BFA4685DCDC6,"The issue of driving while the person is on the cell phone and is a major issue in Georgia and all the other states of America. Many accidents are happening daily, and people are losing their lives. This way many fatal accidents happened, and even small kids lose their lives ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e903d830028,BFA4685DCDC6,"The Law has been made in Georgia that requires hands free driving, that means people can drive and talk on the phone without touching the phone. The Law is still not as helpful as expected ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+ebf7967f1fe8,BFA4685DCDC6,because many people ignore law ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94bb38d1356d,BFA4685DCDC6,"many people's mind is still distracted, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b9d289c93ff,BFA4685DCDC6,and many people still use their hands for navigation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4b173a23db8,BFA4685DCDC6,"The first reason is many people are still ignoring the Law because the charges are very low, if they get caught the insurance rates are nit going to hike much for them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3baa0645f7fa,BFA4685DCDC6,"Auto correct mishaps are hiking, and people are texting, even if it is not legal. It is more dangerous than drinking and driving. The Law must be strict and have a penalty that must be $1000 dollars or get arrested. Just in case of emergency, driver should pull over and talk on the side if the road ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3a29d64ab80,BFA4685DCDC6,The second reason is many people have stressful jobs and they attend a conference call or any stressful situations in the family front while driving. This can distract their mind from driving and even the hands-free driving Law can't be helpful to prevent car wrecks. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc03b273a2b7,BFA4685DCDC6,"In this situation, the law should be made very strictly that person can talk hands free for only few minutes and eliminates other conversations while driving, only important conversations should be allowed. This law can save so many pedestrians too, who runs into a car wreck daily. One example is of an old lady in Atlanta she was run over by a driver in the evening and he didn't even stop after words two weeks ago, according to the news. The lady ended up dying on the street right on the spot. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+073b09bfe596,BFA4685DCDC6,"The third reason I have is people do not talk over the phone always, but people can use their phone for navigation, music and apps. So those things are also distracting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+53594d7fde93,BFA4685DCDC6,"The law should be made by the government that they can tract the minimum usage while driving and even if they must set up the navigation, they can pull over and do it. So, they can pull over to the side to use the phone and should be made on the interstate and the street. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf4a33adb3de,BFA4685DCDC6,"In conclusion, the usage of the cell phone in the car can't be eliminated totally, because cellphones are for emergency use. By only communicating important things and concentrate on driving it can turn into a car wreck and pedestrians can get into an accident. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dfe2c79af098,BFAC540BF099,"luke bomberger wants to be a seagoing cowboy who rides the waves becuase he is used to riding the waves because he crossed the atlantic ocean 16 times and the pacific twice to help people affected by WW 2. he rode on a cattle boat to europe to be a sesgoing cowboy. his friend don reist is going and he knows that luke can surf. and don invited him and luke is working to jobs as a bank accountant and a grouchery store. so he has to decide wether he should go or he should stay at his zenith.
+
+luke decides to go and it was 1945 in WW2 was all over europe many countries were left in ruins.
+
+to help these countries all 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys such as luke luke and don signed up.
+
+in august 1945 the two boys luke and don recived threir orders the report to new orleans. the ywo boys are doing this so they coud be a sea going cowboy.
+
+the two boys arived august 14. the day the pacific war ended they got their seamans papers and boarded the ss charles w. rooster and they headed for greece.
+
+the cattle boat trips were an unbeleiveable opportunity for a small town boy luke also toured china greece venice and a excavated castle. luke was at the atlantic ocean for two weeks and it took him a month t get to china. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f222cd25c0f,BFC4CADADD49,Limiting care usage is an advantage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a2ee0ca17ef1,BFC4CADADD49,some people were always tense when they had a car and now they're saying they're much happier without it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24a38e6c3730,BFC4CADADD49,"Vauban is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called ""smart planning"". Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions tailpipes.. Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States.
+
+In the United States, the Envirornmental Protection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities and legislatores are starting to act, if cautiously. Congestion was down 60% in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog... Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67% of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3% average of diesel engines in the rest of Westen Europe. Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer licenses as each year goes by. When adjusted for population growth, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis by Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.
+
+Part of the explanation certainly lies in the recession, because cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway. But by many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downturn and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way. It will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the envirornment, since transportation is the second largest souce of America's emissions, just behind power plants. Companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves ""mobility"" companies with a broader product range beyond product range beyond the personal vehicle. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit..
+
+New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs across the nation. There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16-to 39 year olds getting a license, while older people are likely to retain their licenses as they age. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009... Bill Ford proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which pedestiran, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportaion traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24e51e3bd196,BFC4CADADD49,"limiting car usage is an advantage. It makes you explore more, get your excercise, try new things instead of always relying on a vehicle to take you somewhere. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2b1ff2bebf02,BFC824D7C408,"Everytime students hear the word school they all have a similar reaction: ""why school."" This reaction is due to the rigor of work school puts on students' backs and the repetition of constant learning. In order to give students time away, they are given three months of summer break which spans from June - August. During this time many kids choose not to continue learning and a negative effect of this is knowledge and memory decay. In order for their minds to be stimulized and conditioned to learn once school begins, schools are requiring students to complete summer projects. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e3678b94b1ca,BFC824D7C408,The summer projects should be designed specifically by students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a1af306b4fdb,BFC824D7C408,they will be able to acquire knowledge in a way that interests them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db92d8cfa31c,BFC824D7C408,"express their ideas without being limited by a teacher, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3c281639034,BFC824D7C408,on the other hand teacher-designed projects would be beneficial to students because the content created by teachers is consistent with the content learned during the school year. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5d01fcab50b9,BFC824D7C408,Summer projects should be designed by students because they will be able to acquire knowledge in a way that interests them ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1f7d6bac401e,BFC824D7C408,"Being able to do something which one is passionate about results in the best work that he/she can produce, this is because learning is driven by motivation. When a teacher assigns something for the student to do, he/she does not have an eagerness to learn because of the fact that it is something they don't have a strong passion for. When students are given an opportunity to produce their own projects, their minds open up and they begin to think outside of the box, which results in true creativity. School is based on a set curriculum and students have no input on what they learn and how they learn it, as a result, students lack effort and motivation to learn. Giving students an opportunity to create will eventually lead to increased productivity in later life One example of this is when adulthood hits and students are required to develop a skill set. Students are never given the opportunity to learn individually and this causes students to become dependent on others to feed them knowledge and information, therefore, students will only learn when they are demanded to. Having the freedom to create will give students their best opportunity to learn, whereas when they are not able to design certain projects, their goal shifts from learning to completing which will result in the content not actually being analyzed and took in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2e4acb6398d3,BFC824D7C408,"Not only does students designing their own projects give them a opportunity to pursue their interest, but it also gives them ability to express their ideas in a fashion which they are not pressured and limited by others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d9d00e93e07f,BFC824D7C408,"Students become boxed in boundaries due to the pressure of doing things a certain way and learning the way teachers tell them to. When students can design projects and learn in a way they believe is beneficial, learning becomes less of pressured task and more of a way to explore one's horizon. One thing students struggle with the most when completing assignments and projects is constant pressure. Students do not have the ability to express their ideas because they have to stick to an exact rubric. One of example of this is a science expo; many teachers tell the students what they should do for the project and don't give the students time to think about what interests them. This pressure of another voice constantly in their head makes learning and expression of ideas a struggle. In order for students to reach their full potential, they should be able to design in a way they are not boxed by others. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fed323472b9c,BFC824D7C408,"In contrast to student-designed projects, teacher designed projects also have a positive impact on students because of their ability to create content which is consistent with the content students learn during the school year. Thinking outside the box and being able to express ideas is very important, however, without teachers, students would have no path of what to learn and how to learn it because they do not have the experience and accumulated knowledge many teachers have. Teacher-designed projects would be beneficial to the students ability to learn during the summer because the content would be structured in way which is taught during the school year. An example of this is when a science teacher assigns a cell packet project which corresponds to the cell unit taught during school. This might be very boring for a student to learn, but doing this project will set the student up for success when school begins. If the student were to design their own project it would probably not be in line with the certain style of teaching which will cause the student to struggle during the school year. The main focus of teachers is to help students succeed in school and by designing these projects students will be able on the correct path to fulfilling that goal. 
+",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8bb99308531b,BFC824D7C408,"Summer projects should be student-designed because students will be able to learn in a way which interests them and express their ideas without limitations and pressure by a teacher, on the other hand, teacher-designed projects would be beneficial to students because the content created by teachers is consistent with the content learned during the school year. Being able to acquire knowledge and learn in way which interests one self is very important throughout his/her life, however there are different goals for both the student and a teacher. The teacher's goal is to help the student succeed in a certain class, whereas the students goal is to learn what they want in a way which interests them. Having the right balance is very important and this balance can be obtained by students designing their own projects in the summer and teachers guiding students during the school year. This method will result in individuality development and the teachers can lead the students on the right path throughout the school year.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0e95f04a383e,BFDD411D610F,"Cars are manufactured. They were designed to be put on this earth and be used by responsible drivers. Having no cars as a safeguarded transportable vehicle is like having your dices tossed on the dirt and you can't predict what you have. It's not define as smart decisions, this is considered by opinions. Individuals have dissimilar opinions on driving, whether it is dangerous to get behind the wheel or that it should be outlawed. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+79de3296dcb7,BFDD411D610F,"Most can agree with the Mobile World Congress in the executive chairman, Bill Ford. His proper approach is to plan a business plan for a world that consider personal vehicle ownership is undesirable so they can put down emissions so it can improve safety. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e645cd80bba3,BFDD411D610F,I don't buy it. Rejecting car culture is certainly the dumbest alternative decisions that anyone has to make. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c1d0891c1aea,BFDD411D610F,"To provide reasonings to my strong point, brings me back to paragraph 36. It clearly states in bolded writing: ''With all these changes, people who stopped cars commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit....'' Furthermore, the demographic shifts in the driving population have strong trend that I can agree with. When you are fifteen, you can partake on the written and reading portion of driving and as you study your way to reach your goal, you get your permit. As you ascend your way into the online session and the real world test, you'll find yourself receiving a license as your ticket of permission to be behind the wheel by the law and by the state. Car ownership turnmoil is documented and caputred by the state due to it's nonfundamental implications that's truly not beneficial to those who rely on taking responsiblity for their actions. But if the decrease in measures that can be jotted down on paper proves that you have overestimated your duties and perogative that will not be catergorically denied before a state court or driving school. Once you lose your vehicle, it's not about banning the driving, this is about how to teach the driver on how can he or she be better the next time. Taking away driving privileges and sorts of public transportation will ease it's way to find itself in a world where nothing will be run by anyone.         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1132351ff263,C05809232F0E,"Every year, school concludes at the start of summer, making summer synonymous with freedom as children have escaped the monotony of school life. However, as children get older, students increasingly have to make a larger commitment to learning and school. This often takes the form of more homework and projects during the school year, but also utilizes the extensive freedom and free time of the summers to keep students up to speed with their academics and prepare them for the next year. However, a debate around this topic has arisen. The question is whether summer assignments should be designed by teachers, or by the students that theses assignments most effect. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1f11f02a15e0,C05809232F0E,"I believe that while the answer is not simple, students should overwhelmingly be in charge in terms of the creation of these assignments, ",Position,Effective,,,
+9a42465151e9,C05809232F0E,"students learning differently, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+30f23023c517,C05809232F0E,"the differing levels of preparedness among students, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9971500788ee,C05809232F0E,the different interests that students have in relation to the same topic. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+54a02e43f29c,C05809232F0E,"Some students may learn better with standardized tests or by listening to lectures and reading textbooks, while others may learn better with a more hands on approach, creating intricate projects or captivating presentations. This aspect is just as important to understand in the context of summer assignments. The majority of teacher created summer assignments are simply reading, whether that be chapters in a textbook or Shakespeare's plays. While this approach works quite well for some students, myself included, it is detrimental to the learning of others. It would be far better to give students an end goal of understanding to work towards, such as a presentation on the material at the beginning of the year, and let them create their own paths to understanding the content that they are supposed to be absorbing over this period. This would also go a long way to increase student engagement in the material, as students would be less likely to see this summer assignment as something of a chore, rather seeing it as a way to express themselves through the way that they learn. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7cab67feb991,C05809232F0E,"This issue is seen extensively with the summer assignments for harder classes, as students may be looking to improve in a subject area or challenge them self, but not have the proper knowledge or skill set to properly learn the content that the teacher wants them to know. For example, a friend of mine wanted to take AP US History this year, but had taken only Academic World History last year. When it came time to complete the AP US History summer assignment, he was out of his depth and did not understand how to properly outline the chapters that we had to read. If we let students design these summer assignments, it will be easier for these kids to access new material and challenge themselves while expanding their knowledge, without overwhelming them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3168a054b754,C05809232F0E,"To bring up history as another example, when analyzing a single topic such as the American New Deal era, some students are fascinated by the economic facet of the topic, while others gain more fulfillment from learning of the radical social change that occurred during this time period, and still others enjoy delving into the cutthroat politics of the era. If students are able to take control of their summer learning, then they are more able to invest themselves into the content that they are learning as it will be something that truly interests them. What teachers should do is establish a baseline topic to understand by the end of the summer, such as the Revolutionary War and its causes, and allow students to research different aspects of this topic and give a presentation on their area of interest. This allows students to enjoy the learning that they are losing their free time to do, but also helps them to continue to learn over the long break. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+20b1fab0e7bd,C05809232F0E,"I believe that it is a long awaited and necessary change for these summer assignments to become student created and designed, rather than entirely fabricated and mandated by the teachers. It is necessary because not only will it help kids to learn in the different ways that suit and engage them best, but also to help students who have less experience in the subject or who are trying to challenge themselves and find themselves frustrated at the restrictions and requirements of the summer assignment. Added to that, a student driven summer assignment will allow kids to more thoroughly enjoy and become engaged in their learning by allowing them to pursue their passions and interest in relation to that topic, and express themselves through learning in unique ways. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c6eea0194ea0,C06AB6F566C8,"During the school year, students are continually asked to complete assignments designed and evaluated by their teachers. Schools that assign their students projects during summer break do much the same. It is always teachers who choose course materials, set guidelines, and decide which subjects are worth learning. At the end of the summer, students return with half-hearted attempts at fulfilling their teachers' expectations. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7b8d05a58e0d,C06AB6F566C8,"Since it is students who do the projects, why not let them decide what those projects should be? ",Position,Adequate,,,
+010df484450d,C06AB6F566C8,"Some might say that if students could design their own summer projects, they would do shoddy work or no work at all ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+68902697cabc,C06AB6F566C8,"However, if students are allowed to pursue their interests, they will be motivated to do their projects. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6e422376722b,C06AB6F566C8,"For example, summer assignments in English often involve reading a book and doing a project designed by a teacher. Instead, many students read the Sparknotes page on the selected book and fumble through the project, having learned nothing at all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce455e5d828e,C06AB6F566C8,Letting students have choice would create an environment more conducive to real learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7109eea4e439,C06AB6F566C8,Giving students the opportunity for self-guided learning allows them to exercise their creativity in ways they typically can't during the school year and learn new skills. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+85aff3d18eae,C06AB6F566C8,"Students typically have more spare time during the summer, so a student willing to take on a large-scale project would have the time and energy to do so. For example, many students who compete in science fairs at the high school level often begin experimentation before the start of the school year. Working on a science fair project as a summer project could produce extraordinary results. A student with less academic interests could spend their summer learning a new skill, like how to cook. Either way, students would return to school having had valuable experiences. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ceffeacdb81,C06AB6F566C8,The absence of strict guidelines would reduce stress. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+07a638d62cc7,C06AB6F566C8,"During the school year, students have many obligations, such as homework, sports, and jobs. For students who have fewer obligations during the summer, summer break is a welcome relief. For students who have to work or take care of family members during summer break, summer projects are an extra source of stress. For both, more flexibility with summer coursework would reduce overall stress and help them balance their responsibilities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+90cc0462c653,C06AB6F566C8,"Letting students have more say in their summer coursework would be better for both students and teachers. Students would rather spend their time doing things that they care about, and teachers would rather not grade dozens of copperplate book reports. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+efe2f90573ac,C0767A86EFA6,My opinion is that we should study venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cf0e38465628,C0767A86EFA6,"Yes, it might be dangerous ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fa5f5daf2e84,C0767A86EFA6,but if you would want to find out more about venus then that's the option. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b3cc0606d4ba,C0767A86EFA6,"""Researches cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance."" We wouldn't be able to see it far away. We would need to see it close up so we would be able to study and explore it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+736a0cc14dad,C0767A86EFA6,"Venus has something we want to learn about, not specifically that but about it. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b3daee1605fd,C0767A86EFA6,"It has so many things that we want to see and study. ""Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite it's proximity to us."" Venus is the hottest even if it's not the closest to the sun. ""Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e78ec562710b,C0767A86EFA6,Studying venus would be much better. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8a202fd773fb,C0767A86EFA6,"We would know more about venus and it is. We would know what it has and what don't it have. ""Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system."" Some of venus features are unknown but some are analogous to those on earth. ""NASA's possible solution to the hositle conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f063378ad811,C0767A86EFA6,"""Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky."" Venus is the second planet from our sun. We are curious what venus has and study it. It has so many things that earth dosen't. It's a whole different planet. ""NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e242dc42ddc4,C0767A86EFA6,It might be dangerous but one day we will get to go to venus. NASA is trying there hardest to get a person to venus but we need more materials and money for that. Almost 3 decades we haven't went to venus. It's a challenge to study and get back. NASA will complete this challenge. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+95b958778560,C0897AC15921,The challenge of exploring venus was being able to study it and what all was on it and what could live on it ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+36e84b41f9d3,C0897AC15921,the struggle of it all was not being able to land any bots on it to adventure and collect evidence of it all. Scientists tried working around it without landing something on it sinse it just gets distroyed while trying to collect data for scientists and hovering something over the planet didnt even work for them. Trying to build a divice to be able to land and last long enough is extremly hard for people for the fact that they have not and cannot land and survive Venus. unable to collect a rock and gas sample make things harder sense they dont know what chemicals are being used against they forces they are trying to take there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ec1770f65ea,C0897AC15921,I believe that the body of this should be faced not feared. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5e36a78ef9df,C08ABCCFBF4D,"The artical is about the planet Venuse. It is also know as the Evening Star or the
+
+Earths twin. Venuse is aover 800 degrees fahrenheite and a 97 precent carbon dioxcide blanket over it. The conditions of Venuse are so bad that they could crush a submarine. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+232e700eb920,C08ABCCFBF4D,The evedence that supportes this artical is when its talking about how NASA is getting involved ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c68489234d1a,C08ABCCFBF4D,NASA has had an idea to send humans and study Venuse. it also talkes about how they have a blimp like vehicle hovering about 30 miles over Venuse. It talkes about if they sent any vehicle to Venuse it would have to avoid the harsh ground. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3597f19d72a7,C08ABCCFBF4D,Scientst are furthering there study on Venuse because they are fascinated by it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb756802fc2c,C08ABCCFBF4D,"The reason there so interested on it is because it is the most earth like planet in our solor system. The planet has vallys, mountains, and creaters which give it that earth look. It has frequent lightning strikes, powerfull earthquakes, and valcanic eruptions. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3412051614d,C08ABCCFBF4D,When the auther is talking about Venuse he thinks that its still a good idea to study it nomatter what the dangers are ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e280fb35cbb9,C08ABCCFBF4D,He thinks that our traves from eartth and beyond shouldnt be limited just beause of how bad the danger is or how bad the conditions. that we should be able to exspand to meet the varry edges of our imagination. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1192759e394,C08ABCCFBF4D,In conclusion we should be alowed to let our imaginations run willed. NASA looking ito sending man kind to Venuse. It is the planet that is the ost earth like is several ways. NASA has been studies Venuse for a while now and have found evidene of erth like structures on it.        ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3b4cb39790c8,C0B83D85BAFD,"The author who is talking all about the planet Venus in this story, is explaining its history and some interesting facts also. Venus is usually called the ""Evening Star"" in paragraph one. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6d0f3992f411,C0B83D85BAFD,"Venus is often reffered to as Earth's ""twin"" on paragraph two. It is also the closest planet to the Earth where 7.6 billion people are today. Each planet orbits the sun in different speeds and when the Earth fully orbits the sun, it is a brand new year! Every time NASA tries to explore Venus with a space prob or something familiar, it would never end up touching the ground of the planet due to a mailfunction with the gravity most of the time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+78e814596ebf,C0B83D85BAFD,The author explains that Venus is a popular plant and should be mostly known for being so close to the Earth. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13fca8a57e14,C0B83D85BAFD,"Even though NASA has accomplished moon landings, might mean we could accomplish landings on Venus or another planet. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a30c40ef4dc2,C0E94C60E7C5,i am here to inform about the advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ca067a856bd1,C0E94C60E7C5,limiting car usage has made people feel safer walking and planners are noe taking the concept to the suburbs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+131ae56881a3,C0E94C60E7C5,reduce greenhouse gases. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77b4c7a6914c,C0E94C60E7C5,"In this new approach to limit car usuage stores are placed a walk away on a main street,rather than in malls along some distant highway. even in the united states the enviromental protection agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously.
+
+for example congestion went down in france after five days not being to drive and of intensifiying smog.70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars,and 57 percent  sold a car to move here. most people are happier with the the car usage limit due to that fact that they have too be tense anymore. and the wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor.
+
+Vauban,home to 5,500 people wihtin a rectangular square mile , is the most advanced experiment in low-car sudan surburban. many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a six year federal transportation bill to be approved this year.
+
+New suburbs may look more vauban-like,not only in developed countries but also in developing world,vauban,germany residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneers,going where few soccer moms or commuting excutives have ever gone before: they have given up their cars .
+
+Vauban,completed in 2006,is anexample of a growing trend in europe,the united states and else where to seperate surburban life from auto use,as a component of a movement called ""smart planning"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e244cb81dc6,C1043F3C0609,Have you ever heard about the thing that happened at NASA twenty five whole years ago? Well it was one of the biggest things that was a thing because they were figuring out if it was a real face or not. It was difficult but i'm pretty sure they found out about it even if it wasn't a face but were about to find out. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+461fa44ba36b,C1043F3C0609,The face was a really difficult thing to focus on for as long as they did. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26f1e2e67676,C1043F3C0609,I don't think they would've focused on it as much as they did if it wasn't so important to figure out honestly. It was just a shadow they saw out of plain sight while a spacecraft was circling around and then they suddenly saw a shady shadow and it looked like a human face. Only a few days later is when they showed the image they took of they shadow for everyone to see. The face begin to be known and everyone was soon to know about it after they reached out and posted the picture of the unknown face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+629aa213ff21,C1043F3C0609,There was many obstacles to find out who's face it was. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6db02ab196ef,C1043F3C0609,"""Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planrt, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face"" (Unmasking the Face on Mars,1), This little bit of a paragraph tells us that basically someone was out just snapping pictures and found this. That's overly rare too have something like that happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28273dc5ef59,C1043F3C0609,Others might say that think it's all fake ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+447edd2b6ca5,C1043F3C0609,but in my prespective I believe that you can't just go and and discover that and it all be fake it's not happening and it never like that ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+694ebd7803e9,C1043F3C0609,"I also believe that it would be hard to take a picture of that thing when you were supposed to do what you were supposed to do. Let people believe that it's ""fake"" but they have prove that's very specific that i cited in paragraph three. This is just beliefs and honesty now others might be different a lot might think different because no minds think the exact same all the time it's simply just what I believe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c054a40ff46,C1043F3C0609,All in all my beliefs are still the exact same I'm sticking to what I think is right. Everyone has their own opinion but if it would get bad because people think all differently this is just what I have on mind. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d0755715d421,C1043F3C0609,The face in my eyes I believe was real because you can't just drop what you're doing and go take a picture of something that's totally fake. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+41dacc14d33d,C1043F3C0609,Everyone has their own opinion though and that's how I see it. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b1228b7e986e,C162431F429E,I like this feature. I'd consider it very helpful on both computers and robots. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fd1ca3505e8c,C162431F429E,"Regarding robots, I wonder if Baymax from Disney's ""Big Hero 6"" had something like it. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+426f5902a07a,C162431F429E,"He was like a robotic nurse as explained by the main character. However, it wouldn't work in concrete tunnels. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+93bd93dbcf67,C162431F429E,"Regarding computers, if the feature could have come out a bit sooner, then Nickelodeon could've used it for a non-animated TV show they came out with, called ""I Am Frankie"". ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+78c5c71c4634,C162431F429E,"I'm still waiting for the show to continue. In one of the last two episodes of this show, one of the judges for this competition that was like a quiz show said that computers can't feel human emotions, but a girl who was part computer proved her wrong. I like this show because it gives me proof of how smart computers are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+659f8de1749a,C162431F429E,"In conclusion, this feature should be used in all computers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+65781abcabf8,C162431F429E,"I'd like for it to be used in robots too, that way robots could take the expression and mimic it ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bed91ab60c09,C162431F429E,"I'm pretty sure the ""Transformers"" movies have something like it too. If the ""Transformers"" movies and ""Big Hero 6"" use it then it was probably already thought of. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a8a0ee491522,C162431F429E,"With computers, someone could type into the computer ""How am I feeling today?"" and the computer could respond with an emotion like said computer has ESP. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd416d9610a0,C1E2F0C453B3,Is technology able to read the emotinals sxpression of students? The technology is diffferent when they want to test it on paintings that have been here for more then a a couple of years. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+77d7ca6ecbbe,C1E2F0C453B3,The emotional edcpressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can tell you alot about the students with in minutes of it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bdf753c72491,C1E2F0C453B3,We perform these same impressice calulations everday ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e55d00e5c5a6,C1E2F0C453B3,When you tell a friend about your feeeling by the look on her face. Some people can tell that when you are upset or even more. It depends on the people. Da Vinci stuided human anatomy to help him painy facial muscles precisely enough to have emotions in the paintings. The new softwat stores similar anatomical information as elctronic code. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be693fdb761a,C1E2F0C453B3,when you look at the mona lisa it brings a smile to your face ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3ad25f8cf591,C1E2F0C453B3,It shows you how much a computer can do. The computer knows when you are sad and happy. It's like a dog knowing when you are upset or happy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+34655e4adc85,C1E2F0C453B3,Not everything should be abe to be on the computer alot of things aren't even on the paper. It's all online. It take a lot of emotions. When you paint monia lisa you are puting emotions on the way that it being painted. It can be different on every painting but it shows more emotions then having it online. When working online with emotions. When it's online it not how it done. The computer is doing with what some people want. Emotions shouldn't be read by computer becuse they do mess up and someone would have to fix what the computer picks out. emotions should be painted or drawed out on a paper not on a screen that you can easily delete. When on paper make a mistake then easer it. It shows maybe using the coumputer's can mess what they want. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8634511f5258,C1EAD0C50570,"I agree all students must partticipate in at leasat one extracurricular activity at school, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e0f7828f0738,C1EAD0C50570,it's good for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f4ada348251,C1EAD0C50570,"they can spend more they'er time at school playing sport or doing some other activity like math clup or working on the school yearbook any other cluping or activity, and help student learn more new stuff. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+04ba314cf8c5,C1EAD0C50570,"students could leaen more about sports an be healther and know how to play it other thing is that they can do there homework at school if they cant do it at home or if they have no one at the house to help them.
+
+participate at schools activity something that all school should have and make students have a better guatction in there furcht and help how to become good person later in life. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+892120adde3d,C1EAD0C50570,"The most importent thing about participate to school activity is you can spend time with your friend and teacher and your principal too, and it help students with there grades too. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea1ceba18fc7,C1EAD0C50570,"Not all students have or must participate to school activity, but is there choses rather they want to or not but i thing is impoent to partticipate an actiticy at school is for there good.  ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1a1f6b5a15a2,C1F74C98535E,The author supports their idea very well. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0ab31e89c2e9,C1F74C98535E,The story is very convincing to start off. The authornmakes sure to mention a lot of evidence to back up his/her statements. The author mentions a lot of facts with another fact to prove it is true. The author did good with trying to get their point across because of all the points they made to back up his statement. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45f0ed2fa094,C1F74C98535E,The reason I think the author did good is because the author seemed to know what they were talking about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56dc01c96047,C1F74C98535E,The author mentions how Venus is most alike to Earth. Also that is just one of the many statements the author makes. The author had also used other statements to compare to why we could go to Venus. The author even gave their own idea on what think is possible. The author uses plenty of facts to help his idea and what he/she is trying to say. The author even says how NASA is working on approachesto study Venus and that helps make the essay even better. The author does not see his idea as a risk and more as a challenge. The author seeing it as a challenge shows he confidence in his idea. The author also uses how Venus has so many things alike with earth that it should be explored. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4be71854bdf,C1F74C98535E,"So all in all the author made a good essay and did well supporting his idea. The author was consistent with his/her idea.
+
+The author made sure to use important facts to support their idea. The author was well rounded and did not seemed biased with their idea and was very convincing with what they said. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ba117716e26b,C21E1457C1D4,"Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Mona Lisa is a Painting that is drawn by the use of color painting and other handful material, when humans are drawing with their hand and feelings it shows the facial expression and emoyion of the drawing ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a974b9317724,C21E1457C1D4,"Technology cannot be used to express humans feelins or emotions, even with what is installed in it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+43cd8f54d706,C21E1457C1D4,"With the use of technology, the facial expression and emotion of Mona Lisa and even other drawing emotions and feelings cannot be expressed because technology has no feelings or emotions, also emtoins cannot be calculated, ""Hold on! Can we actually ""calculate"" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+266455cccdcd,C21E1457C1D4,"Technology cannot express feelings to human, so it cannot be used to calculate human emotional expression. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb9789f75b00,C21E1457C1D4,"In technology, the human muscles, 3-D computer model of the face and all major humans muscles are installed in the computer, ""The process begins when the computer constructa 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit"". Technology should not be use to paint or even draw because technology cannot express human feelings and behavior. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+87394d57c45e,C21E1457C1D4,The use of technology to read emotions expressions of student in the classroom is not valueable because technology can never calculate the feelings or expression of humans. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd673b0a6966,C21E1457C1D4,"
+In conclusion to the use of technology to calculate humans emotional expression. Technology cannot calculate humans expressions because humans emotion and facial expression varies from time to time and based on what there are seeing and feeling at the moment, so technology cannot calculate human expressions. If technology can calculate humans feelings the our phone or other electronics devices should have been able to tell us where we want to go to at a particular moment, and be able to know when calls should come in or not. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1eea86023d4a,C24C0AF54AB1,Luke Bomberger became a Seagoing Cowboy he helps people whose lives had been affected by World War ll. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+917d834fe27f,C24C0AF54AB1,"Luke became a Seagoing
+
+Cowboy because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime, as he says in paragraph one. Luke also wanted to help others who had been affected by World War ll. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9d6ba2134b7b,C24C0AF54AB1,"Luke crossed the Atlantic Ocean sixteen times and the Pacific Ocean twice, to help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and much more as it says in paragraph two. Even though it was a long journey across the oceans and the waters were rough ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ccc9b2214bd,C24C0AF54AB1,Luke loved being a Seagoing Cowboy and he loved to help the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74d568e33b2f,C24C0AF54AB1,"Some people would probably refuse to go to another country that had just been through war some people would say it was to risky and unsafe well it is, some people might say that it is too dangerous to cross the ocean ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a0a4fbe56dd1,C24C0AF54AB1,"Luke felt that these were things that he needed to do and is something that is important to him. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f6f1b11c1a3d,C24C0AF54AB1,Luke also got to visit many great places in between his journeys ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77f22de75688,C24C0AF54AB1,"he got to see many different places such as the Panama Canal on his way to China in paragraph five Luke says that ""seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special"" and ""so was taking a gondola ride in Venice , Italy a city with streets of water. Luke thought that it was all so great. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c64dabc16654,C24C0AF54AB1,But some people might say that they wouldnt go there because once again it's just too dangerous or that if they wanted to go there then they definetly not go on a boat and they would much more want to fly there ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+456187934eda,C24C0AF54AB1,Well once again that is their opinion and Luke was happy the way that he went and was happy that he could see it and that he go to experience the jouney. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4abf85458f17,C24C0AF54AB1,"Luke loves being a Seagoing Cowboy he loves all the sights, all the help that he can give to these other people, and that he could have this opportunity in life.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c8323a1784b8,C268CF77D6E0,Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy has a lot of ups and downs but the ups are accually pretty cool ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0b12d879c8af,C268CF77D6E0,You might find an uncharted island and make a lot of money off of it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+39b6d05f5d83,C268CF77D6E0,You would see interesting and cool places while you were travleing to the destination. I have always wanted to go to Ireland but i dont think that i will ever go there... Unless i become a SeaGoing Cowboy of corse! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90ed252f8191,C268CF77D6E0,You get a lot of excersise by traveling a lot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de29d2420ecf,C268CF77D6E0,"If you are the kind or person who really likes to travel, then you would like to be a SeaGoing Cowboy. You get a chance to be on a boat in the open sea. I would really like to be a SeaGoing Cowboy because your always out at sea and i love the ocean, i could live on the ocean if I could. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9eb956391999,C268CF77D6E0,You would try new things on the on the way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2eb42ba41ebb,C268CF77D6E0,"you would land on countries or islands that you have always wanted to go to. You might also get respect from the other landgoers. I mean, who wouldn't like to have respect from other people! (Plus you get an awesome name) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+829bf2c50d47,C268CF77D6E0,"So try it, it might be your kind of thing, or maybe you could just sit around at home doing dishes, chopping logs or something, Who knows maybe you will become a SeaGoing Cowboy one day. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c34c3eaaa41d,C295FC9B8627,the author is right in this passage because in paragraph 8 nassa is trying to shut down all the towers ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c3d84ca3d229,C295FC9B8627,the author about this story he wishes nassa could go away but that will be inpossonle ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b4751c2145a0,C295FC9B8627,these differences from nassa are in speed mars and other times to venus because venus is sometimes around the corner cloud drapped world ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cdd5fc4adfa2,C295FC9B8627,each previous mission is unmanned and for a good reason cause nassa can handle there men unmanned they all survied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why venus spaceship hasnt touched down in almost 3 decades ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d58642a93c2f,C295FC9B8627,So nassa is concerned about venus spaceship ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d86854c9855b,C295FC9B8627,A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. if our sister planet is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing futher visits to its surface ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4dd1213d47f,C295FC9B8627,there wasting there time for all the importanty of nassa. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c12bb9e2c92f,C295FC9B8627,the surfce was rockey and couldnt be walled on because of that reason or drove on there was mountains and craters furthermore. the nationL aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d24b1758e413,C30B2AD4AF0A,"According to the LA Times, 253 million vehicles are on the roads in the US. Since there are so many cars on the road, safety is a pressing issue for the American public. At first it was concern over seatbelts, then drinking and driving, and now it is cell phone usage while driving. Since the rise of cell phones, more cases of drivers crashing due to being distracted by their phones. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+57dd1365ce4c,C30B2AD4AF0A,"Due to this, it should not be allowed for individuals to use their phones ",Position,Effective,,,
+e0f845648207,C30B2AD4AF0A,they have increased the risk of crashes ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ba138e4ec9b2,C30B2AD4AF0A,fatalites ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fe41019a1e46,C30B2AD4AF0A,injuries. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fd871bdc0621,C30B2AD4AF0A,"It was reported by Edgarsnyder. com, that according to the National Safety Council, 1.6 million crashes are caused by cell phones every year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e71dfd3ae303,C30B2AD4AF0A,"This displays the danger that cell phones pose to the everyday driver. And the danger only becomes more clear when one compares the cell phone crashes to the total number of crashes per year. According to USA Today, out of all the crashes that happen in the United States everyday, 1 out of 4 are caused by cell phones.
+
+These statistics are exactly what shows how dangerous cell phones can be. Distracted driving is one of the main sources of crashes and they are a danger to the modern driver. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3b3e503646d4,C30B2AD4AF0A,"Edgarsynder. com reports that every year, 390,000 people are injured in cell phone related incidents on the road. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+44de40184dea,C30B2AD4AF0A,"Distracted driving has now become more dangerous than drunk driving. In a report posted by TheZebra. com, 101,000 more people are injured by distracted driving than drunk driving. This clearly demonstrates the inherent danger cell phones displaywhen drivers use them. And since this past time is so dangerous, insurance for those have been caught texting and driving are paying the price. In a report posted by TheZebra. com, in 2011 the penalty for texting and driving was $2.35 added to the premium price. In 2017, the fine added was $226.36. That is an increase of 7,944% in the penalty price. So not only is distracted driving dangerous for the drivers' life, it is also dangerous for the drivers' wallet as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+183daddd4976,C30B2AD4AF0A,"In a article posted by the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA), 3,166 people a year are killed because they were texting and driving. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e52603e61b96,C30B2AD4AF0A,"That is almost half the number people killed due to drunk driving, which also according to the NHTSA, is 7,000 people a year. Edgarsnyder. com reported that 21% of all fatal teen crashes are caused by distracted driving. The action of using cell phones while driving is not only an unnecessary risk to the American public's safety, it does not seem to have an impact on how dangerous it is to the teens of America. Also mentioned by Edgarsnyder. com, AAA conducted a survey in which 94% of teens said they knew that texting and driving is dangerous, but 35% of those teens said they did it regardless of how dangerous it was. This shows just how little the youth of America know about the dangers of distracted driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+12cb3d3e7c3c,C30B2AD4AF0A,"The NHTSA says that at any given time, 660,000 people are using their cell phones while they drive. This means that 660,000 Americans are gambling with their lives. Distracted driving is a epidemic in America, and it should not be allowed under any circumstances. It is a deadly and costly endeavour that does not have any benefit to those who choose to participate in this affair. Texting and driving is illegal for a reason, because it has been proven that it should not be done. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a94146749142,C30DD2DB1F70,"The use of technology can be operated for many different reasons. Is technology valuable for emotional expressions of students in a classroom?
+
+Everyone has their own opinion in the use of technology based on facial expressions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7b07c89ea910,C30DD2DB1F70,"In my opinion, I believe reading emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+27b29f092009,C30DD2DB1F70,This can be taught as if you we're being instructed by math. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59409263b57b,C30DD2DB1F70,"You may be thinking to yourself ""How can this be possible for a computer to be recognized by a facial expression?"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07caa3e69d0b,C30DD2DB1F70,"According to the passage, the computer process begins using a 3-D computer model of the face. The appromixate number of 44 muscles must move just like a human. A man, Dr. Paul Eckman created six different emotions such as, happy, surprised, angry, sad, fear, and disgust. Then each characteristic would be assocaiated by the moventment of the facial muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c355e0b4e652,C30DD2DB1F70,This technology can be helpful for students because of new emotion-recognized software tracks these facial movements ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+928263377c14,C30DD2DB1F70,"By weighting the different units, the software can identified by the using mixed emotions. Each emotion is compared against neutral face, in other words no expression shown. You can tell the difference of a person's face of how they're feeling just by looking at their face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b5a08f06bee,C30DD2DB1F70,"But they might alsp, have other feelings within inside them. The new software stories similar anatomical information as an electic code. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1df3bc40c14e,C31E318BE4C1,"Having a extracurricular activity will actaully help you out in life ,if you put in effort you could even get a full-ride to harvard if your an athlete all you have to do is some extracurricular activity and try it. I used to do basketball when i was smaller ,and when i was doing that i met one of the funniest people i've ever met ,and now she became my bestfriend ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+994be51ecacd,C31E318BE4C1,if you would like your life to be amazing when you grow up you should try a extracurricular activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4452be499f0,C31E318BE4C1,get a scholarship. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9660722fa90,C31E318BE4C1,"when you go to your activity you'll meet lots of new people ,and slowly you'll start to trust them and them too ,and then boom! your friends , ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9892345927dd,C31E318BE4C1,"when you try a dress on for example they'll say wow! that looks beautiful on you and then you'll have a much better self-esteem/ more confidence, also when you go to the mall and your looking for jeans for example and you say what about this one? one will say yeah it'll look great on you while others might say it looks fine but this one will look better on you and you'll have different peoples opinions ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76356bf08b46,C31E318BE4C1,"if you try new things you'll probably find something that you'll actually like, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+35a469128f33,C31E318BE4C1,"like soccer my dad used to teach me how to play soccer but i didn't end up liking it but my cousin did he even ended up traveling the world because of soccer everyone is different i'm not saying that if you try soccer you'll like it but what i'm saying is you should try new things who knows you might end up traveling the world. you might even turn out to be outgoing you'll try something like skydiving something that i've been wanting to do for years or you might even like to do checkers something which i find pretty interesting but who knows only you will know when you try new things. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2dcb3e67f896,C31E318BE4C1,"if you were doing football and you were really good you would most likely get a scholarship to a really good school and play for their team and if you put that on your resume , ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e74ef36fa236,C31E318BE4C1,"that job is like athletic or anything in general then your most likely gonna get the job, scholarships are good for your resume but their also good because your perants would be so proud that you got that scholarship all your friends and teachers would show some respect too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90cb5b934ccf,C31E318BE4C1,"in overall i agree, i think that students should do extracurricular activity ",Position,Adequate,,,
+25bef84b6d54,C31E318BE4C1,"cause it can actually help them allot like if you stay for afterschool you can learn more, and if you do a sport and you try your best im sure you can achieve anything in life. if you would like your life to be amazing when you grow up you should try a extracurricular activity and get a scholarship. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a8b6fb892f82,C323ACC08DC7,"You may belive that it was aliens that created this ""face"" on mars, Where is your proof to support that eveidence ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+24452148a58d,C323ACC08DC7,The face could just be a natural landform like many other things like we have found out about. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7ba2fa789cbd,C323ACC08DC7,"Whats your proof that its aliens, Becasue when we have circled the rest of the planet we have not found civilizations or colonies of alien life. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e688b7801285,C323ACC08DC7,"For instensts a metior could have just hit the planet in that spot leaving a mark that looked like a human face leaving you to belive this. There could be aliens out there but there is no proof that we have them in our universe yet, There are many diffrent reasons why there could be natrual causes as to why it would look like there is a face on the planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d2bae9011d5,C323ACC08DC7,"Mars has clouds around its planet and other planets do that may be where aliens hide and have there villiages. You beliveing in them could be correct but also wrong at the same time. We just dont know what could have caused that face on mars aliens, natural formation, crator. You maybe belive this because even the scientist have gotten the false imput that they were real and that this was a aien artifact ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cdd1dd2c0242,C323ACC08DC7,We jsut have no evidence proveing wether or not this is an alien artifact or its just a natual landform.        ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+42eb8c4024e6,C33B92E8D3FE,Why would the author ignore the dangers of venus ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0f7350d07844,C33B92E8D3FE,The author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc26108766a0,C33B92E8D3FE,"Because of how hot it is it's very dangerous . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c8a4533088ba,C33B92E8D3FE,""" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system ."" The author has believed that the ,""Conditions aren't easy but humans can survive in venus ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ce17d2b8fd8,C33B92E8D3FE,"
+."" The author wants to explore it no matter how dangerous venus is it's like earth and if so they want to see if there is people living on venus and if there like us since humans could live there.
+
+Reseachers can't take gas or rock samples from venus so that is why no matter how dangerous venus it's so interesting for the author.
+
+The astronomers are planning visit so they can see the different things on venus or the earth like things on venus. The dangers of venus aren't dangerous to astronomers they are just challeneges. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef34e93a9416,C33B92E8D3FE,Why is venus called the evening star? Well it is as know as that because it is one of the brightest points of light. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+143f057dfff3,C33B92E8D3FE,"Or the twin of earth.
+
+Venus and earth are just like each other same density, size, the closest distance. They both could have humans living on both planets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee8fe621ef31,C33B92E8D3FE,That is why the author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers it presents. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9a63a9b8713b,C3EEDCA21B42,"Warm air and salty hair, whats better than summer? Nothing! Summer is all about swimming, sleeping and hanging out at the pool with friends. However, that all ends in august, when it's back to waking up at six o'clock in the morning and all that awful hoemwork. Would'nt it be nice if there was a way students could adjust to school without physically beging there? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+dc2f66a5f43d,C3EEDCA21B42,"Teachers should design summer projects to help with this very issue, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bdc658b5f79a,C3EEDCA21B42,it prepares students for the upcoming cirriculum ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a9fc72f11ba0,C3EEDCA21B42,aids students in adjusting to their teaching style ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1c089bc732b1,C3EEDCA21B42,"it will help students get back into the swing of school. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+9b92c3dd73f8,C3EEDCA21B42,"Going back to school after summer break isnt fun for teacher or students, nor is it easy. Having a summer project may seem dreadful, however it can actually be very benefital. As students age into their next year of school the cirriculum gets harder and harder. Having a project to help ease them into their next year of school would alliveate the anxious feelings surrounding that course. In fact, many students are taking advanced placement courses, surrounding those advanced courses is stress and anxiety, a project designed by their advanced placement teacher will help prepare them in what to expect for the year ahead. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b50f3f8cd2f4,C3EEDCA21B42,"Throughout grade school we all had a hard time adjusting to diffrent teachers as well as their teaching methods. However, if every teacher were to create a summer project to match thier teaching methods, students would be able to adjust to diffrent teaching styles which, not only would benefit the student themselves but it would also their raise their grades dramatically. Studies have shown that a student will perform better with teachers who he/she feels comfotable with, boosting their grades and overall academic perfomance. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d03f55e64924,C3EEDCA21B42,"School is hard, there is no question about it. Having the countless hours of homework, while needing to get eight hours of sleep pluse extracirruculars! Theres just not enough hours in a day! Having a project given to students would help adjust them into the swing of school by preparing them for the homework load they are about to be given. This will also prevent students from sleeping all day because they will need to do their project, and still have enough time to do what they want. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b029fdae2ff,C3EEDCA21B42,"While a teacher designed summer project may be benefical, some may argue that students would do better with a student designed project because they understand the struggles of eachother and can help reduce how much work needs to be done while also teaching the student ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d600e27a6d34,C3EEDCA21B42,This may help students feel less overwhellmed however it will not prepare them for the rest of their schooling years because as previously stated the course work only gets harder and simplifying the work load will not do anything. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+3f8fc334d6d1,C3EEDCA21B42,"Summer time is exciting but when it comes to a end it can be upsetting. Feeling prepared for the year to come and all the work along with it could really help one in feeling less nervous, scared, and discouraged. Teachers need to design projects over the summer so students feel excited and ready for school to begin rather than to feel disapointed and unprepared.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+09aa2d2e858c,C405CB0C12D2,"Scientist are interested in exploring Venus but they find it very hard to explore it. Venus has high temperature that make it harder for them to be able to get a closer look at it which makes it a challenge for scientists for to even get a closer look at it. If Venus is Earth's sister planet why is it so inhospitable for us to live in it. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4fe99c6f6bb1,C405CB0C12D2,Why are scientist wasting their time trying to explore it and how would we know what is actually in Venus if we haven't yet explored it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0a9798188c68,C405CB0C12D2,"I think it may be a bit to dangerous for any of us to actually be able to explore it without the right equipment and the right person to send there without knowing for sureif they would be getting hurt or not. I think it is to much of a risk to send someone up there and risk their lifes all just to be sure if Venus is safe or not. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+062741c50320,C405CB0C12D2,"In paragraph 4 it states that ""Long ago,Venus was probably covered lagely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like in Earth""scientist could just want us to have a better future for our future kids and families along the way. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8e76bcc291d0,C405CB0C12D2,"In this pargraph it is saying that Venus could be another resource for us to use as an Evacuation if Earth is no longer safe for us we have a second choice. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+32cda76c26c0,C405CB0C12D2,We may never know if we don't explore it but I still think it is a bit to much of a risk for us to take because we never know something could go terrible wrong and we all end up no longer exsisting. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4e5d1f5172dc,C405CB0C12D2,Earth has many similarities and many differences scientist want to be able to study Venus to be able to come up with new vehices another project is looking back at an old technology called mechanical computers. These devises make calculations by using gears and levers and don't require electronics at all. in article 8 it says tha we shouldn't be scared of what may happened all that matter s is what's right for the people. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+11bf188e8128,C4118746172C,"In order to assure that students are learning over the summer, some schools require students to complete summer projects during their break. Some people believe that summer projects should be student-designed, while others believe that summer projects should be teacher-designed. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f81fbd82625f,C4118746172C,"All in all, summer projects should be student-designed. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a28da3bdd2f8,C4118746172C,"if projects are student-designed, then the students will actually want to do the project and learn things from it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f13e92c7e8b9,C4118746172C,"most of the time when teachers give students projects, they are pretty boring and students don't want to do them. When students create their own projects, it gives them a little more motivation to do them because they're allowed to do it on whatever topic they want to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80bffc6d0173,C4118746172C,"if summer projects are student-designed, then students won't be as stressed about the project as they would if it were the teacher's project. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab76f96e5671,C4118746172C,"the projects teachers give students are sometimes hard and it makes the students stress and struggle to get it done. When students create their own projects, it's less stressful because they get to choose what topic the project is about. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d28ffcba9d29,C4118746172C,"Although these views are correct, there are some who disagree. Some people believe that students don't learn when creating their own projects to do. They also believe that students aren't capable of doing their own project without the assistance of a teacher. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3b3d8e86e10e,C4118746172C,"However, students technically do learn because when they are doing research about their project, they are reading and learning things about it. Also, if the students need help with their project, they can get the help they need from a parent, friend, or a family member. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+08977f8b79fc,C4118746172C,"summer projects should be student-designed. When students design their own projects, it is easier for them and it motivates them to want to learn. Although some people may disagree, these views are correct. Students that create their own projects are less stressed out about the summer projects, therefore making them more likely to succeed on their summer project. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3444ef81dd09,C44A40CDFF3A,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue their learning during the break. Every individual at some point in their life has had to make a project of their own. Whether it be a project at school or a project at home for themselves to enjoy. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+dee20612898b,C44A40CDFF3A,"So when it comes to these summer projects, they should be student-designed ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7d7d794653e2,C44A40CDFF3A,"an individual has more freedom to choose a topic of their own, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8fa0ef41d03f,C44A40CDFF3A,they are less restrictive ,Claim,Effective,,,
+df09aa34f84e,C44A40CDFF3A,"students can use their best strengths to make a project that is less stressful for them. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+e9e7dbdf3f32,C44A40CDFF3A,A student has more freedom when choosing a topic of their own with a student-designed project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a1fa0507a9f8,C44A40CDFF3A,"For instance, a lot of the projects in school are tied to a specific topic. When it comes to choosing the type of project, at a first glance, there may seem like there is a lot to choose from. But in reality, this is just the illusion of choice. There isn't a lot of room for creativity and imagination, therefore there isn't much freedom. Many individuals will agree that with more freedom, they have the liberties and creativity to come up with something that is unique. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cf0a5953c38,C44A40CDFF3A,"Others may argue that with more freedom, a student might not stick to what they what they are supposed to learn ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a41babd96230,C44A40CDFF3A,"But that is far from the truth. It is the opposite, students are more restricted when they are forced to create a project with a topic they are not the best at, which leads to the next point. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+15bc9d61a9e1,C44A40CDFF3A,Student-designed projects are less restrictive. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a368b7bd8b23,C44A40CDFF3A,"For instance, much of the work we are assigned in school is teacher-designed. From personal experience, when a project is teacher-designed, a lot of the work can be mediocre, as apposed to a project that is student-designed. When students aren't allowed to come up with their own ideas, their imagination is bound and restricted. Some teachers may argue that it doesn't matter that students are restricted, all that matters is that a student gets the work done, but that is not correct. The student wont be as motivated and will turn in a project that is has no effort, therefore getting a lower grade. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea78b8df9f2b,C44A40CDFF3A,individuals can use their best strengths to make a project that is less stressful for them with student-designed projects ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f9f39fb08077,C44A40CDFF3A,"A project can seem like a large and outstanding task to finish for a large amount of students, and as a result, puts stress on an individual. A student-designed project can relieve plenty of this stress, as students can choose a subject that they are best at. It is easier for someone as they are more comfortable with a topic they are more knowledgeable with. Other individuals may argue that students should make an effort to choose a subject they aren't familiar with, but many can disagree because choosing a topic someone isn't familiar with puts more stress on a person and can lead to them struggling to learn. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+627162083850,C44A40CDFF3A,"Summer projects help students learn during the break, but students should ultimately decide on designing their own projects for individuals to continue to learn. At the end of the day, they should have the freedom to enjoy doing what they are best at they shouldnt be stressed over work they aren't comfortable with in the summer.          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3b12252d50f7,C4C3A58C5939,Venus is dangerous because its one of the closes starts to the sun. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+075e594deea1,C4C3A58C5939,"Since venus is so close to it makes it the second hottest planet in space. Its hard for them to examine it closely because how hot it could be on the planet so the sit safe at a certain vantage point.
+
+Venus is close to earth witch makes itthe twin like in terms of density and size its close but distant a little from venus. So say if we get close to the sun earth woukd basically be like venus. Venus and earth is right around the corner from eachother so wat makes it different from eachother shouldnt the earth be hot too. To really think about it hot would it be if we were like venus.
+
+The atmosphere is 97 perdent of carbon dioxide blankets venus which could really explain where the heat come from or take place in. Theres acid in venus atmosphere the pressure is 90 times worst than what it would usally be on earth. Its over 800 degress on that plante which makes it a baby sum or the son of sun. Venus has one if the worst tempature ever it gets so hot that it woukd kill us humans in a instant if we think about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5fc01f60b34d,C4C3A58C5939,But they said venus is like the earth twin. So do you think that it was once life on that plantet before in the past and the sun ruined it so there no more life everything is excint on that planet. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c3278a962c2c,C4C6482B9C24,"Venus, sometimes called the ""Evening star"" it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky that is amazing. Well Venus is actually a planet.
+
+Venus is called the ""Evening star"" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple from the distant but safe vantage point of earth it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closley. Often referred to as Earth""twin"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size and occcasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Marsour other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times in Venus. Maybe this is issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than threendecades. Numerous factors contribute to Vensu reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a8a75d16327,C4C6482B9C24,In conclusion this is why it is worthly to study about Venus. Itis very cool and interstead to learn about ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bca2e8c341b5,C4C6482B9C24,You could learn so much about Venus its really cool ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d5165689d395,C4C6482B9C24,It is worthly to learn about Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2eb0ee32caf7,C4F0E1CA18F0,The author struggles to explain the advantages of what will happen if NASA explores Venus. It is close to impossible with the technology out right now for NASA to be able to explore Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5d1c9bd66d21,C4F0E1CA18F0,It is really worth spending years and millions of dollars to build a spacecraft that will tell NASA about Venus. We do not even know if the spacecraft will even make it there knowing that the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbob dioxide. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05b8c648f73f,C4F0E1CA18F0,The auothor of this excerpt thinks it will happen ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86b44e000118,C4F0E1CA18F0,"In the excerpt ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author states ""each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, sice no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours"" (Challenge). Landing spacecrafts on the Venus is almost impossible. There is too many factors that NASA will not be able to figure out for the next fifty years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d9e21b10d90b,C4F0E1CA18F0,"Also the author says ""today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth"" (Challenge). ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+000f96227017,C4F0E1CA18F0,"One of the major reasons why people still want to explore Venus is because astronomers believe that it was once covered in oceans. The author calls Venus ""our sister planet"" because of how it was formed, like Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b9b04de0760,C4F0E1CA18F0,Knowing the dangers of what might happen to someone or something on Venus is a very scary trip that many people are not willing to take. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8cd80f507304,C5021AF61E5F,"Do you think every body should do a extra curricular activity? Most people do activities but the school does not run them. A lot of schools dont even host good our a lot of programs. Most activities do not fit every body. After school things separate more time away from peoples family.
+
+If someone makes the team for a sport over a kid who wants it more then that person. The student that made it gets forced to do something he docent want to do, and ruins opportunities for other kids. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+46d8237990cb,C5021AF61E5F,Students should not have to do a extra activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+62edaf4ea944,C5021AF61E5F,kid who want's it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2126e54d73ce,C5021AF61E5F,freedom ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+59f9d3da92ac,C5021AF61E5F,passionate. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+128e16f52a6e,C5021AF61E5F,might not be able to achieve there goal. They put in extra work and grinding for along time. Some kids might just be there to say they are on a team or program. If every one had to do one extra activity things would get packed. They have been trying there best for a lot of years and just join something for free. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37466e666972,C5021AF61E5F,they like to go home play with there dog our younger siblings. next there some kids that like play video games and make money from that. Forcing kids do an activity might make sad if they get joked cause they do something wrong. Not every body parents or guardians can come pick the up after school. Theres a lot of kids out there like to do activities by them selves because it helps them focus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+096ac6809a9e,C5021AF61E5F,kids are passionate about there own activities ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49967e4e95e9,C5021AF61E5F,Having to do another activity can make some students irritated. Students are already at school for seven plus hours. Kids should follow there dreams stick to it and make new things happ ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b0ac35bfbaa,C5021AF61E5F,"Having to do extra activity when just make the day if longer. They want to go home and live there life how they want to. Students should not have to do a extra activity kid who want's it, freedom, and passionate. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3dc53e0e1d5c,C51752A9035C,"Does working on a school project during your summer vacation sound fun to you? Instead of going out to the beach and see the red flower sun, would you rather stay inside a cold and damp house with flickering electricity, and waste your time doing work for school? For me, I'd choose the beach, no questions asked. Since I'm a teenager in high school, I know a thing or two about wanting some freedom for myself. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c3b5dabdf3b5,C51752A9035C,"Summer projects should be student designed, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+316ca8dcca6e,C51752A9035C,"as much as it is beneficial for a student to remember the past lessons they've learned in school, hardworking students especially, deserve time for themselves to experience joy and free time from the hard work they've paid off doing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c580e0b70605,C51752A9035C,"students won't have to worry about time management, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b4f94b1ccd08,C51752A9035C,"the work wouldn't be the issue, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+558883e0ee1d,C51752A9035C,the students would be doing the work for the teachers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+13a38ed88be6,C51752A9035C,"It really depends on the students schedules, for example, if a student works on a student designed project, and plays a sport in the summer like for instance soccer, the work could easily be completed if the student balances his or her time wisely, maybe playing soccer like at nine fifty in the morning, and working on the student designed project at one fifty in the afternoon, could balance the students time easily. Another example on how students wouldn't have to worry about time management is that, students could also make time to spend time with their families, if they ever plan on going to their cousins birthday, or go to their brothers or sisters sport games, students can choose what times work for them, and their work would have to be their second priority. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+04c98f2f5858,C51752A9035C,"When students make work for themselves, they tend to understand what their own assignment or tasks mean to themselves. For example, students can make their own projects by using websites such as adobe spark or prezi. com , and can also make their own projects on Google PowerPoint. if the student knows how he or she could benefit themselves on making their own work, then the students can accomplish on being their own teacher. Another example on how the work wouldn't be the issue, is that the work itself would not be difficult to get done. when students make their own work, it may not have the same work level like a teachers work, but it can still be educational and it can be easier. If a student designed project was created on Google PowerPoint, then that would not be difficult to get done. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8892ce01524f,C51752A9035C,"The student is literally taking the role as a teacher to him or herself. For example, if a teacher is planning to go to Hawaii for the summer, but doesn't have time to create the project for him or herself, then they could ask their students for assistance on that. The students would be in charge of doing the work for the teachers and that could also help with the teachers time management. Another example of how the students would be doing the work for the teachers, if a teacher doesn't show up for summer school and if he or her is absent for it, then they could ask one of their own students to probably be one of the substitute teachers for the summer school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dae19f40b0af,C51752A9035C,", even if teacher designed projects could also be beneficial to a certain group of students, the knowledge being given to the students mind won't make as much of an impact as a student designed project would. People tend to forget that not all teenagers come from the same mentality of not being hard workers or not smart enough, every person in this world has their own intelligence within themselves, people just tend to forget and start to believe that they don't have a smart mentality. If teachers can have enough trust in their students and be willing to ask them for help, then that should be a sign that summer projects can be student designed. Therefore, if there are not enough teachers who can help make the projects for students in the summer, then students can try to help with that if they want to. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c1cc96346bd,C51A802386C6,"The Mona Lisa is a subject painting by Leonardo Da Vinci who tried to show the perfect emotion of her, Mona Lisa's face 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry, How could we know that in a neutral face? Is not magic, is just technology. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+60a363e0634a,C51A802386C6,"Now exist a new system that can recognize the emotions, thsi new innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang of the Beckham Institute with collaboration prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam, they are experts at developing better ways for Humans and computers to communicate, this actually is not like math homework when we can calculate.
+
+The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. Then, Dr Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr Pail Eckman creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). This man classified six basic emotions HAPPINNES, SURPRISE, ANGER, DISGUST, FEAR and SADNESS, and he associated each characteristic movement of the facial muscles.
+
+In fact,we humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" every day, so, you can probablly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.
+
+The Mona Lisa demostration is really extented to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do, however the same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery. For now this is the answer for the questions of the beginnig, this is the new technology can do today, What will can do next? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b05e398e2d36,C5569B2725B4,"For me a car is very important , because if you have a car you can move to other places that you want . But not only that , if you have an emergency you can go rapidly,or in time . But this is not a facility in all countries and exist much problems with that , for example in Germany the street parking ,driveways and home garages , this are generally forbidden ,new district on the outskirts of Freiburg, near the French and Swiss. but in Vauban's streets are completly car free , this is so good , but with a limit ,like  except the main thoroughfare , where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs.
+
+In conclucion:""As a result , 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars , and 57percent sold a car to move here"". And this is in source 1.
+
+In source 2, in some countries exist prblems with traffic in the strees. One example is Paris ,"" 4,000 drivers were fined , according to Reuters ,27peoplehad their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. But the traffic go down 60 percent in the capital of France , after 5 days of intensifying smog . But of course  some countries have more that others , for example Paris typically has more smog than others europrean capitals , ""Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter ,per cubir meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London , Reuters found .
+
+In Bogota, Colombia one day is celebreted as Car free day , but in once  year occur somthing different , millions of colombians hiked , biked , skated or took buses to work during this day , leaving the streets without traffic jams .
+
+Paks and sports center also have bloomed throughout the city , uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad , smooth sidewalks ,  and others , restrictions have dramatically cut traffic . In conclucion the day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid 1990s . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ab57dd9198e,C5A3278EB458,Should there be a rule on everyone taking extracurricular activities. Yes because they provide information and fun for the students. Without after school activities students wouldn't of made as many friends as they have made. When I was in an extracurricular class we got to know the teacher better and see what she had to teach us. I met one of my friends today at an extracurricular activity because we had the same interest in soccer. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b369ffef8193,C5A3278EB458,I agree that students should have to participate in one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a2b3103e0819,C5A3278EB458,they can meet new students ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+57173119730c,C5A3278EB458,be active ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8457475f69e1,C5A3278EB458,learn more about a subject. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+111bb1aeaac6,C5A3278EB458,Extracurricular activities educate students about a specific topic that the students are interested in ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+851db88dc819,C5A3278EB458,"For example, I was in the soccer club in 6th grade and we learned about the history of the sport and how it started. The robotics club is where students learn about building and technology. It can help students learn tips and tricks about architecture and how to build things. That can help them in the long run if they want to join a field that uses robotic and architecture. It also teaches students how to work with others to solve a problem. Extracurricular activities serve as good learning chances for students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19ec35e41600,C5A3278EB458,By taking extracurricular classes students get to meet new students and make friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a5ca7ec4f8f,C5A3278EB458,"The students have common interest so they can talk to others and make friends. An extracurricular activity would be good for a shy student so they can get out of their comfort zone in a small group of people. Students can learn to share their ideas in an extracurricular activity because it is a small group and them they can get more comfortable to do it normal school. These friends can transfer over to normal school so kids that are quiet and don't have any friends will have someone to talk to, someone to work with during group work and, a friend. Extracurricular activities can help students make friends and come out of their comfort zone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95e85e645f9e,C5A3278EB458,Being active is an important part of daily life. Extracurricular activities can help students be more active. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f45211723074,C5A3278EB458,"They give students something to do after school other than homework and sports. Students can catch up with their friends they haven't seen all day and give their parents a break. Extracurricular activities are good for teachers if they are bored and want to teach and have fun with their students. Extracurricular activities also count as the sports teams so you can be active by joining a sports team. For example, I joined the soccer club so i could be active. It was really fun and a good way to be active. Extracurricular activities are a good way to be healthy and active. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36f326889c4b,C5A3278EB458,"Extracurricular activities gives lots of opportunities to students. They should make it mandatory to participate in at least one extracurricular activity. The activities have lots to give to the students. They should be mandatory for them so they can learn more and expand their view of learning. Extracurricular activities helps kids come out of their comfort zone and make friends. Extracurricular activities help students make friends, learn about a specific subject, and stay active. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2c710fd5dcfc,C5B3EC7CBE65,"the autor suggestds that we should explore venus, personally i think it not a good idea but the author really does not support it and gives great examples to why we shouldt go out a study this beautifle planet called venus. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b4b5fd3055d3,C5B3EC7CBE65,"on paragraph 3 the author really gives us great exam-les of the problems of exploring this planet one great exaple that i think will convince people from not going is that the authomosphere of venus is really thick and it is 97 percent carbon dioxcide which is bad for us , and also the temprature on average is 800 degrees which is pretty hot. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0819b5b1606,C5B3EC7CBE65,As i saw read this part i noticed that the author isnt really against studiyng this planet he supports it. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b60305ed7a58,C5B3EC7CBE65,"On paragrapgh 4 he tells us that venus is simaller to earth becasue they have terrains just like ours, valleys,mountains ,and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14fdcf2cc464,C5B3EC7CBE65,The author also shares with us and writes that Nasa's possible solution to exploring or studying this amazing planet without having to touch the surface ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e45bd875acd,C5B3EC7CBE65,is float above the fray use an aircraft that is like blimp. This will only help them see the surface but they wont be able to collect rocks or soil which will be harder for them ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+641e604f49a8,C5B3EC7CBE65,One way Nasa is already working to be able to collect rocks is by using the computer used during World War 1 called mechanical computers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f076f46d4631,C5B3EC7CBE65,"they can make calculation by usinf levers and gears. that way when they are up ther and send robots these can last longer and take data in, casue the modern computer tend to be fragile to heat. And in venus there is alot of heat. i believ the author really gave good details to why it is a good idea to studybthis amazing planet and really supported it now will see what time will show us ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b55329e1aa8,C5B3EC7CBE65,"if we are the right thing like the aouthor writes ""we should meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1a77e201c569,C5C6DED9C790,i think it's pretty much safe for stop driving cars or give them away ,Position,Adequate,,,
+85c8bdbc7a84,C5C6DED9C790,given your cars away will reduicing accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+225c664e76fe,C5C6DED9C790,more people will feeling safe when they walking in the streets and more parents will let their kids playing in the streets without asitated ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5284813815a4,C5C6DED9C790,the air will be good and everyone breath very well ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+df039ffd4eaa,C5C6DED9C790,more people will stop getting ticket from police. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76ed495b4702,C5C6DED9C790,taking some one 's cars away will hurt some people 's feeling and this idea sound good to me because some teenagers keep making some fast cars and racing in the streets and there  is some time most of them got their self killed or burning a life in the car if they can especially take those cars away it will be more safeand tey will stop dying in cars accident. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+288c3056ddbd,C5C6DED9C790,"'as a result ,70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars,and 57 percent sold car to move to move here''i think those the talk about in this paragraph are acting smart,if all of those have been following those others example  sold their and take the money you could probably feeling better or let them take it away from you won't feel good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e66951e39d4e,C5C6DED9C790,"''paris bans driving due to smog''that is the most dangerous part in driving cars when it smog in the air ,people have 55 percent chance to got yourself killing or cars crash. this idea was the greatest idea ever. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cb4d5c3ef73e,C5EDEF3A8C35,"Classes nationwide usually have a required summer assignment. Whether it is reading a book, solving math equations, or writing a paper. The teachers hand pick and choose certain tasks for each subject. Teachers give out homework to keep their students always in check of their knowledge. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c93e4c336ebe,C5EDEF3A8C35,teachers should design the summer work ,Position,Adequate,,,
+16a8fe0ab171,C5EDEF3A8C35,"it allows caters to their classroom experience, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d194c4ed201,C5EDEF3A8C35,"it lets students know the expectations in the class, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+27aa08316bb8,C5EDEF3A8C35,students are opened up with new knowledge. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+705d18c5d226,C5EDEF3A8C35,"
+Every teacher is made differently; their way of presenting and showing materials differ. Therefore, teachers should make their own homework for the students. For example, if a student make a study guide for a test verses a teacher, who's will be more effective and useful? This is very obvious however, it clears up the air. Teachers make the classroom's atmosphere and lead the class to its maximum success. To expand, imagine if there were no teachers,only students teaching each other. Frankly, it would be chaotic and a disaster. The teachers are there to keep students in check and to create lesson plans and work for the students: to know how the well students are doing. Students do not check how well the teachers do because as students they receive the knowledge while the teachers pass it on to them. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cc3bb929353c,C5EDEF3A8C35,"If the teacher sets an example such as the summer assignments, students can see what type of expectation that teacher and subject has for them. It allows students to see what the teacher has to offer them. If the students make their own image of the class, it could be a hard adjustment for both the student and the teacher. For example, a student comes into AP Environmental Science with a bright colored poster, hardly any sentences and fill with visual diagrams, that student came in with a mindset of expecting that class was going to be visual filled, but in reality, they take notes and notes on end. However, if the teacher assigned to each student that they will be needing to watch a documentary and have notes filled out, every student will come in knowing the rigorousness of the class. If students were allowed to freestyle and choose their own assignment, the likelihood of them knowing the expectation of the class is close to nothing. Like so, using the teacher, can expose the students to the class before stepping in it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+70f39349b22d,C5EDEF3A8C35,"If a student wrote a summer assignment paper about what they thoroughly know, it does not teach them anything new. They are not receiving any new information, but on the contrary, if they were exposed to a new topic and researched about it, they would be able to retain new information and learn more. It could lead the students to more success to; if they are opened to new ideas and points of views, the student will learn more and be able to grow in knowledge rather than be stuck in the same perspective that they are in. For example, if a student was bias against the creation of country clubs and corporate made communities, but was to read about why those were created due to an assignment, he or she may have a shift in perspective and mind. This does not apply that he or she has changed their mind, but it has opened up their knowledge and gave them a fuller picture rather than it magnified.
+
+Regardless, if students like the subject of research, or not, that practice will help them grow in writing, reading, and critical thinking skills as well. This increase in knowledge applies to when the teacher is designing the assignments. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b6a31b65b076,C5EDEF3A8C35,"the teachers knows best. Every teacher creates worksheets or something for a particular reason, they do not give anything away without reason, and that is the same with the summer assignments. The teachers makes these because they want the students to be able to know and continue on retaining the lessons. It allows teachers to give students a heads up on the future needs, lets students know what type of teaching style they are getting into, and it increases minds and helps students grow for the future.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+672ffa794f44,C6204A4BFD65,You know what i do agree on what this article is saying why because people tend to use their cars all the time and yea what if we live far from town ok thats fine but i see people in my naighborhood driving two streets down just to hang out with there friends when one could simply just i mean put it this way ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8678691030b3,C6204A4BFD65,if we were to drive less ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e912d40b7331,C6204A4BFD65,we would limit accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+041d0e64baaf,C6204A4BFD65,"tickets, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+29b3bd2a0df6,C6204A4BFD65,polution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d43541f7442f,C6204A4BFD65,You might ask your self how would this limit accidents well say you were driving one night to your best friend jeffs house and jeff lives three streets but you wanted to get there faster and the car on the oppisite lane the driver falls asleep and all of a sudden boom!! you dont know what just happen think about you could of been dead right in that instant but if you would of walked no accident you could of dodged the car. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50555452b148,C6204A4BFD65,"Tickets and people might say "" man, police be racist pulling me over for know reason and now i have to pay a fine and go to court"" no buddy you were pulled over because you were being stupid on the road trying to act cool in front of your friend but see maybe if you where riding a bike or walking you probaly would of never got pulled over and  wouldnt have to pay a fine. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80bfff8416e7,C6204A4BFD65,Less polution polution is really bad in alot of countries i mean its so bad that its kind of hard to breathe i mean it would suck if yoy were on vacation in the carrabians trying to enjoy a nice tropical day outside but you can't why because you can bearly breathe with all that polluted air around so yea. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2f0b7cd9712,C6204A4BFD65,its not hard to ride a bike or to get a electric scooter or a moped or walk it benefits you and our earth i mean i agree with driving just to places you need to go like traval or grocrey shopping not to race act dumb or black smoke people i we made a don't drive your car week it would really benefit our earth alot. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cc74ed80cb9e,C620D8B8466B,"About twenty-five years ago, something happened around Mars. NASA, snapped photos of the object. On Mars, there is a face printed on the plant. People think it was created by aliens. NASA said it was created on it's own. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa. Those are common around Cydonia. A couple of days later NASA saw a nose, eyes, and a mouth. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+33fffff1cf39,C620D8B8466B,"Everyone belived it to be a face of an alien, but NASA said it's just a face on Mars. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+fb9c90a24f72,C620D8B8466B,"The face on Mars has become a popular icon. It has starred in Hollywood films, appeared in books, magazines and more ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09eb9de1db69,C620D8B8466B,"Some people think the face is ""bona fide"" evidence of life on Mars ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f6f6162fe4d4,C620D8B8466B,Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+19ad86f70055,C620D8B8466B,"The face, is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35d01ae20f25,C620D8B8466B,Mission controllers prepared to look again. Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the plant like a fax machine. Thousand of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9136c68f6d9,C620D8B8466B,The pictures were revealing a natural landform ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2c3899d0f56,C620D8B8466B,"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, com[ared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.
+
+""As a rule of thumb, you can discern thinkgs in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size"". In egyptia-style prramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were! There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Proupulsion Lab when the face apperared on their moniters. NASA, a few days later, unveiled the image for all to see. The authors thought it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebaeaa51fe36,C620D8B8466B,What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa. Landforms common around American West. People say thst it's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+22fbac70d65a,C6C49435744E,"The idea of useing technology to read students emotions can have two different sides to it.
+
+People can like or hate this subjuect ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+f36a0091a7ca,C6C49435744E,because it could cause alot of problems for that student ifthat student dose want to talk to the school oficals about something thats going on with them then ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fb2917982d2,C6C49435744E,studensts shouldnt have to talk to school aoficlas about their personal problems. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5e82bb74f1e,C6C49435744E,The other way this could go is that useing this machine or whatever it could be to read students emotions could be a way to try to stop the student suicides. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d56a56dbf7d,C6C49435744E,The ways that this argument would go could have many many problems even getting into the school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+542d063bbf1d,C6C49435744E,"The way that the school would have to use this if the students would not want to talk would be an evation of privacy which is against school reguations and is against the law.
+
+In order to get this into the schoolsthey would have to get this past through not only the board of dirctors but through hte court to because of the way that they would have to use this machine they would have to have it pasted through the court system and have them say that thaey agree to allow this to happen and alow them to invade peoples privacy in hope of helping them with what is going on in their presonal life that they are having trouble with. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a01105b65ba8,C6C49435744E,The other way that this argument could go is that the way that the machine could help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86ff184c0568,C6C49435744E,it would give the people that dont want to ask for help or are scared to ask for it a chance to be helped and a chance to be saved form whatever they would try to do to themselves. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+202f45df3129,C6C49435744E,This machine could help stop bulling this machine could also stop alot of the student suicides that happen every year because students are afriad to speak up and they dont think that doing so could ever help them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+977f2a99d749,C6C49435744E,"The different sides of this argument have very imortant details.
+
+The way that is could hurt or help students is something that really should be looked at.
+
+If it helps more than it hurts it should be looked into because that could mean alot of saved lifes.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+88d466cb405c,C71DC2FEAD0C,"The new software can make 3-D models based off your face, to be able to do this software need to have fine accuracy. the software could identify humans emotions, but should be used in some cases. As in making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+cbc32a7e4b1e,C71DC2FEAD0C,"What they shouldnt be allowed to do, is to choose certein ads and tv shows based off your emotions. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+632df873eb50,C71DC2FEAD0C,"The new software is a compter that can know someones emotions just baseed off of one photo, or painting. This compter has such fine accuracy that it can make 3-D animated faces by the 44 major muscles thats in your face. This compter can know weather if your happy, surprised, anger, etc. This makes it easier for game designers to create people with better expressive faces, can help with video surgery. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+11b971727068,C71DC2FEAD0C,"The desgners of the computer also want it to show peolpe ads based off the peoples emotions, weather if there sad, happy, mad, etc. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce048810e842,C71DC2FEAD0C,"This would make people more incline to buy something based off there emotions. Which shouldn't be allowed, beacuse the computer could take control over peoples wants and there needs based off there emotions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bd01462cca4,C71DC2FEAD0C,"This also is a lake of privite life, meaning that, beacuse your computer is scanning your face to ""finger out your emotions"" it also have a copy of your face. Which if people can get a hold that, they would have personal info ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+701cd484fe9f,C71DC2FEAD0C,"For example, with the new Iphone X. you can unlock your phone by putting your camera towards face. so if you happen to fall asleep, someone could get a hold of your phone and unlock it by putting it towards your face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d036dfae792e,C71DC2FEAD0C,"In conclusion the new computer software is a great creation which could help with computer animation and video surgery. But shouldn't be allowed to be used for ads, to make people but stuff based off there emotions. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ed371a731530,C71F197DD70A,I beileve the author supports this acticle very well humans could survive on Venus. It would take time and work but I beileve it could happen. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d5ac071ae6bd,C71F197DD70A,"Often referred to as Earth's ""twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c319782cb526,C71F197DD70A,"These diffrences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. The Harsh tempatures and low air pressure the raidation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions but survivable for humans. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+46481a4e6567,C71F197DD70A,"NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplifed electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted weeks in such condtions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e57152994c58,C71F197DD70A,"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On planet's surface tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86fa6af4b51a,C71F197DD70A,"Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in our solar system, though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on it's surface. If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronmers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of a rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+70f4c42cb302,C71F197DD70A,"In conclusion I believe humans could live on Venus unless It orbits too close to the sun it could get to hot. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dnagers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Would you want to live on Venus with the high tempatures and low air pressure? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e47c1ddb2dc3,C7373B980F7E,Why call it extracurricular when you are required to do it? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+029d7a2062f1,C7373B980F7E,I disagree that you have to stay after school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a36d0bb1e806,C7373B980F7E,what if you have a job ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31b6ca67e4f4,C7373B980F7E,parents are divorced ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b97d8eb4deb,C7373B980F7E,have no time to chill with friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01ff591fa152,C7373B980F7E,"if you have to walk home with your siblings. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+345ed08d6dd5,C7373B980F7E,What if you have a job then you would not be able to sat after. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11a5fe5a5370,C7373B980F7E,"The reason why you can't stay after is if you have a job you have to get ready, you have to take a shower. You might even have to do choirs if your parents give you some when you come home from school then you have to leave for work and on top of that you might have to do homework. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76f3b42a6249,C7373B980F7E,What if your parents are divorced. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af9a4498d7ee,C7373B980F7E,If your parents are divorced then then you might not be able to see your mom and your dad as much. Without being able to see your parents as much that will leave you and your parents depressed do to the mental health problems that occurs when your parents divorce. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85b01e5ddce0,C7373B980F7E,If you are required to stay after school then you wont have as much time to hang out with your friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41be049df90d,C7373B980F7E,When you are at school for so long you get anxious because all you are doing is traveling to room to room all day then they add even more time to the day its just bound to have more frequent fights. But not only that you dont get to see your friends as much because by the time you are getting home its becoming dark outside ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b80ed3a28e62,C7373B980F7E,When you have to stay after you can't walk your siblings to your house. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86440fe262b7,C7373B980F7E,The nice thing about getting off ealer then the elementary school kids is when you get out of school you can walk to there school then wait for your siblings. But if you are required to stay after school then you cant walk them to the house which would mean that they would walk by them self or a parent would have to quit there job to make sure there child gets home safely. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c72f404af989,C7373B980F7E,"You should not make it required to stay after school because we might have a job,parents that are divorced,wont have much time to chill, and our siblings might have to walk there house by them self.  ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+65002a85a809,C74CBEFD0B9E,There are many ways to limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f1e4ca2189d5,C74CBEFD0B9E,it would be better for the enviorment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4192fa467acc,C74CBEFD0B9E,more cash in ur poket ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5c6715b768f,C74CBEFD0B9E,useing less gas ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78f83f495c71,C74CBEFD0B9E,it would be much safer for your if it gona have a cerfiu. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2d9dfd2d39ce,C74CBEFD0B9E,getting to places faster ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62f8f34f72b2,C74CBEFD0B9E,If you dont have one you have to walk which means exersicse so youd be in better shape then in all the car riders ,Claim,Effective,,,
+680a6c561de2,C74CBEFD0B9E,"youd also have more money because with no car you dont have to buy no 40,000 parking spot or waste money on gass ever week and a half ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b88e3064730c,C74CBEFD0B9E,youd e saving the enviorment by not realysing toxic fumes in to our atmosphere which creates global warning which mealts the ice in our poles and your basicly killing pinguens. dont be a pinguen killer. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33312df8b2d3,C74CBEFD0B9E,"i think if they were to put a cerfui on driving out at night time less bad stuff would happen let me explain my self. If i somthing were to happen to me like getting kid naped  and i dont retuen home by 3;30 yor gona knoe somthing is wrong and maybe it might even save my life.
+
+then our goverment could make money by giving us tickets but hopefully its not a lot because ufortuanetly not every one has a little cash in there pockets like some of us do.
+
+If in case it past the curfui and u need to get home you could just walk home or have the cops take you home beause all cops are free taxis. If you didnt know. its aslo totaly free. cops arnt just here to give you tickets. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2b7515628c8,C79753F72EF8,"If it was an object created by aliens then why would they turn that landform into a human face. There have never been any reports of someone coming close to an alien face to face. Also how would the aliens know what humans look like, they have never even been to earth before ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+315580af4513,C79753F72EF8,"All that face is, is a rock with shadows from the sun to make illusions to the human eye. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+03aa2e3d0bd1,C79753F72EF8,The face was used in grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d3b7f9313fdb,C79753F72EF8,"you may think think aliens did it and there is a chance they did, but that chance is very slim ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+25a5ed5e122a,C79753F72EF8,"yes, some scientist did believe it was an alien artifact but that was before they had HD cameras and now we can see the rock clearly. Garvin said that ""If there were objects in that picture like airplanes on the ground or egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b87f1b099162,C79753F72EF8,"In conclusion, there is no evidence that aliens have created that face and if there was, NASA would do all that it could to prove it a farce. Do not believe everyhting you see online or in books. You might just become too attatched to that topic. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b8d5d3659aa1,C7AD757540AE,The facial action coding can be used in good ways and in bad ways ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f95e737d6ed2,C7AD757540AE,It can also be all up in peoples personal bussiness and maybe people don want that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0413ca1a284b,C7AD757540AE,dont want you knowing all about their life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef2636e02508,C7AD757540AE,The technology is getting too advanced and people are starting to feel uncomfortable because they cant hide any secrets or any feelings that they have ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b881cc518f06,C7AD757540AE,the technology is getting so advanced that one day someone will make sonething that can read your mind or etc. This machine can only be valuable on some occasions like when someone says that they want you to know their emotions and how they are feeling then they will tell you theirelves you dont need a machine to do it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1622749989b,C7AD757540AE,Becuase then you will be all in their business and people dont like that ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f87395e0f8c,C7AD757540AE,"They want their personal space and they want their thoughts to be kept to theirselves without the whole world knowing or people knwoing what is wrong with them and what their thoughts are. This machine does not need to be bulit because people can just tell you how they feel you dont have to go make a machine to knwo.
+
+If they wanted you to know then they can tell you theirselve. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9ba7c8ff3ed,C7AD757540AE,People can use this machine uncontrolbaly and it could get out of hand and share more things then it was suppose to and that could make people feel uncomfortable and not so happy ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c5189b6d3f7f,C7AD757540AE,"Also if other people found out your secrets and things they can get spreaded and start rumors and other things that can be bad for you. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c2b98cec8f3f,C7AD757540AE,I would not want this machine in my life ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f966e46d350d,C7AD757540AE,because i dont want people reading everything that i have and everyday because its my buiness and if i want to share it then i will. I want to keep everything to myself and not let anything get spreaded around and make my life worst or bad because of it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a048c877807,C7AD757540AE,If you want people to have good lives then you dont need these kind of things in the world. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e4fa3bd4d752,C7FA88E9DF3B,"Have you ever been assigned a project that you did not want to work on? This regularly happens to many students, due to a variety of reasons. Although summer projects are slightly different than those assigned during the school year, they cause similar problems. The student might have been lazy, did not have enough time to work on the project, or the topic did not interest them. While schools cannot help much with the former two reasons, they can with the latter reason. Teacher-designed projects can be biased, affecting the student's ability to gain a wide understanding of a topic. Additionally, teachers tend to assign projects on topics that students do not see much importance in, as the topic does not seem to affect the student in any way. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7ddd3a05c50f,C7FA88E9DF3B,"For these reasons, summer projects should be student-designed ",Position,Effective,,,
+3e15ebdca1ac,C7FA88E9DF3B,"to allow students to be more passionate about the project, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bedb68b0c6ee,C7FA88E9DF3B,"be creative, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dcbe0060032e,C7FA88E9DF3B,"be more self-reliable. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1ec2dbc5243,C7FA88E9DF3B,"Student-designed projects allow students to be passionate about the topic they are working on, causing them to work efficiently. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c4db14f4d638,C7FA88E9DF3B,"When students are assigned teacher-designed projects, they are not usually excited to work on the assignment. Additionally, they do not value it as important, leaving the work until the last minute. For example, in 7th grade, my Life Science class was assigned a project about the deer population in Virginia. Many of the students did not actively work on the project, as they found the topic boring. Because they did not understand the relevance of the topic, the students were not passionate about the project. An independent project assigned in my AP Lang class, however, had a different result. The assignment was to write a research paper on a social issue that interested us. Because students were able to write about an issue that interests them, they actively worked on the project. Being passionate about a project also affects a student's performance in class. For example, because the majority of the class was not passionate about the deer project, they did not do well on it. However, on the AP Lang assignment, the majority of the class did well on related assignments, as they were passionate about the projects they worked on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+93d475e4d166,C7FA88E9DF3B,"Summer projects designed by students allow for creativity. Students are able to express themselves, as they are not restricted by strict guidelines the way they are with teacher-designed projects ",Claim,Effective,,,
+115a43f4abf5,C7FA88E9DF3B,". Because of this reason, students are more likely to actively work on the project and put in more effort. For example, my AOS biology class was assigned a project to research and present information about a group of proteins. We were allowed to present this information in any way we wanted, allowing for creativity. The majority of the students were very excited to work on the project, as they thought of fun ways to present their information. Some students created songs to relay their information, whereas others made fun videos to do so. A few students even baked cakes to provide information about their proteins. Each student actively worked on their project and put in effort to make sure it was done well. The element of creativity allowed the students to see the assignment as a fun project, rather than as a boring task. Because the majority of the students worked hard on the project, they did well on it. Furthermore, they effectively retained the information they researched, allowing them to do well on the corresponding test. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5057a83be957,C7FA88E9DF3B,"By allowing projects to be student-designed, schools allow students to develop a sense of self-reliance. This is because the students have to conduct their own research in order to find a topic that interests them, rather than just receive a topic from the teacher ",Claim,Effective,,,
+26089c25fa44,C7FA88E9DF3B,"For example, in elementary school, students come up with their own experiments to test, after which they present their findings at the science fair. By doing so, students learn how to depend on themselves to find information. Similarly, sophomores at the Generic_School take a research class. They work on a wide variety of projects that are mostly assigned by teachers, but towards the end of the year, they must come up with an independent research project that they will work on in their junior year. In order to choose their project, students have to conduct extensive research to understand the topic, as their project cannot have been done before. Additionally, they have to continue conducting research in junior year to allow for a wider understanding of the topic. This allows the students to be self-reliant, as they know more about their project than their teacher, who acts as a mentor. Self-reliance is a very important skill that helps people succeed in the community and workplace when they become an adult, so it is important to establish the skill early on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6776afc7f939,C7FA88E9DF3B,"Some people may believe that allowing students to design their own projects creates more work for teachers, putting stress on them. The teachers cannot have a uniform grading rubric and must have enough background knowledge on each student's topic in order to grade them fairly. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d08bcc98199d,C7FA88E9DF3B,"However, by allowing summer projects to be student-designed, teachers do not have to come up with a topic themselves. Additionally, they are exposed to a wide variety of projects, allowing them to be more interested in the presented material. This allows teachers to be more likely to grade the projects fairly, as they do not have to repeatedly look at the same information. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9d5ce7f30f24,C7FA88E9DF3B,"In conclusion, self-designed projects allow students to be passionate about the topic, resulting in the creation of better projects. Students can demonstrate their creativity, allowing them to effectively retain the learned information. They also become more self-reliant, which will help them when they get a job. Rather than assigning teacher-designed projects over the summer, schools should assign student-designed projects to stimulate learning, as well as shape students to gain skills that will help them succeed when they become an adult. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8280202c832a,C8126FF37E55,"In this article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author gives many details throughout this text as to why he believes that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers. ",Position,Effective,,,
+717d2d55eba9,C8126FF37E55,"Given these details, he uses useful information that we need to know. In the first paragraph he describes what Venus actually is. If he wasn't to do that, people might be misleaded and still assume that Venus could perhaps be a star. The author gives very useful information to describe what Venus is. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+44e1c5994ef4,C8126FF37E55,"An example would be, ""Often reffered to as ""Earth's Twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance too."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+acb9f8d7e741,C8126FF37E55,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7ca0d7796600,C8126FF37E55,"The author supports their claim by giving numerous details and supporting his ideas.""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endbeavors."" A big issue that is brought up are the harsh conditions Venus brings. ""On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheight, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Knowing this, you might think that they must stop there with their research because there's no way they can discover Venus now because it's to dangerous and harsh. That is false, ""NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."" Their solution is to have a vehicle hovering over Venus that would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. It would still be toasty but not deathly. The author claims, "" Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" The author supports his claim by saying yes, the temperature is a challenge they will face, but NASA has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus, and they will continue to challenge themselves and find solutions to these conflicts they face. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b49be16e7950,C8126FF37E55,"The author mentions, ""More importantly, researchers cannot takes samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance."" Although this may be a challenge, the author states that many researchers are working on innovations that would allow their machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to their knowledge of Venus. In paragraph 7, it states that NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus, and that it is possible and worthy of doing so. One project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. ""By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat and other forces."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a6a6b54264e0,C8126FF37E55,"The author does a good job by using details to support that although this is a challenge, they are willing to dive deeper into studying this ""Evening Star"" known as Venus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+81000ce0d9b2,C8126FF37E55,"In coclusion, the authors final claim states, ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" Although there are many dangers that could seek upon them, they take them as ""challenges"" and are willing to dig deeper to find out why Venus is the way it is. ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system."" Therefore, this is why the author does a good job by suggesting that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d4257f438d90,C822187BF7E4,Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dedca7097cbd,C822187BF7E4,they could make life long friends that have the same interest. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bf40a133458b,C822187BF7E4,"For an example, if you join a club or sport and know nothing about it, you could ask someone in that club or sport to explain and help you understand more about it. After that, you just might have a new friend. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+481ad726a776,C822187BF7E4,Students could join a extracurricular activity because they need a hobby ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+60cb19273e05,C822187BF7E4,Students who don't have any activities to do after-school should sign up for a sport or club because they could become really interested in it and keep doing that activity throughout the school year. Students should join extracurricular activities because they could be fun and it could be a new experience. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8223b4932834,C822187BF7E4,Students could join a extracurricular activity to make new friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+024b25bad2e0,C822187BF7E4,"If you have a small friend group and want to expand, joining a club and/or sport would be a good option because there's always teamwork involved. Students could make friends just by having the same interest in a activity, subject, hobby, etc. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b6dae5b5d1f,C822187BF7E4,In conclusion I think joining a extracurricular activity is a good idea for students because they could make new friends and find a new hobby they like. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d581aa164e1,C8ABD5217114,"There's alot of extracurricurricular actiivitys you can participate in , but some people don't like to participate in activity's. Some of them can be boring making people not want to do them. Then theres some people that love doing activitys like that. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ff5fa3e64d67,C8ABD5217114,It shouldn't be up to the principal if they want to participate in them or not. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+30fc61151ba6,C8ABD5217114,There is just some people that can't participate in things like sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+557c50dbe324,C8ABD5217114,if doing extracurricular activitys could help peoples grades then i think the people that aren't interested in doing them would be more interested then. But for now they're just for fun and now days teenagers just want to hangout with friends and be on their phone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3dd430c4c11b,C8ABD5217114,There is some people that barely get to spend time with their family because they're so busy so they don't have time for activitys. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+020d56976376,C8ABD5217114,With sports being a extracurricular activity there is some people that can't afford is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cb67593e68e,C8ABD5217114,"because it can be exspincve and some kids/families don't have the money for that. Theres some kids that would love to do things like sports , but don't have transpartion or money and some schools don't always have rides for students to get back and forth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+248fd7f67a16,C8ABD5217114,Some students can't participate in things like that because they get in to much trouble ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+949a006070f0,C8ABD5217114,*they only do it like that at some schools* ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62756f4f7529,C8ABD5217114,"I don't really see a point of having to do a extracrricular activity theres just no point. I don't think trying it once would hurt to see if you like it or not! If our principal made us do this i feel like it should be once a mouth because other people have other things to do and are busy , and i feel like the students should be able to pick what activity they want to do or not. And the teachers should put it in as a grade if they participate or not.
+
+End of teh story , i think theres no point in extracurricular activitys. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8ecf6959b01d,C8C708EC29F7,Why students should participate in extracurricular activities. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+63ae61382042,C8C708EC29F7,You should consider doing a extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ed56b2fb43d1,C8C708EC29F7,"participating in at least one extracurricular activity can help you branch out, make new friends, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b94806c4b90a,C8C708EC29F7,you can have access to Currier interests. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a394fcce774,C8C708EC29F7,they can help you have a overall better experience at school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+066c0fcfffe5,C8C708EC29F7,Many enjoy doing these activities and find it very relaxing to get away from school for a while and try something new. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+445bcbfd1003,C8C708EC29F7,"When you are doing something you enjoy, you can find people with the same interests as yourself. Many people like myself love doing extracurricular actives. For example I love doing FFA, I've met so many great people along the way. This organization has taught me so much, such as life lessons, leadership skills, and team building strategies. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82d5183e7496,C8C708EC29F7,this is a great way for students to interact with others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+179214a6e742,C8C708EC29F7,"In addition they can participate in sports, working on the yearbook, and the debate team. Sports, is a great way for you to get the exercise you need, becoming more social with others, and being competitive with other teams. Working on the yearbook is a great way for students to take pictures, edit on computers, and take part in the making of the the yearbook. Finally the debate team, this club is for students who are very opinionated, strong willed, and are not afraid of public speaking. This club is great for students who enjoy arguing against others and communication well with other teams. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+550e3a016f45,C8C708EC29F7,"You may decide to try something new and really enjoy it. In the future this could possibly be a Currier interest for you. For example if you choose yearbook, a Currier option for you could be photography. There are many options out there, but this one extracurricular activity you choose, could help you make that decision. On the other hand I would think about choosing one of these activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba8af5402d5d,C8C708EC29F7,"you should consider doing at least one extracurricular activity. You can branch out,interact with others, and have access to Currier interests. These activities can really make you more skilled at what you love to do. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+84f28cfb4293,C8D4EB858DA4,The author of this article uses many valid points and reasonings to support their idea. ,Position,Effective,,,
+5dc8f861c645,C8D4EB858DA4,They refer to Earth and it's compatability to Venus a lot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a1b478bfe49,C8D4EB858DA4,They also use reasoning about Venus's temperatures and conditions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6b4c0436276,C8D4EB858DA4,"In the second paragraph, the author states ""...Often referred to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8cd79f34ab27,C8D4EB858DA4,"They are insuring that a helpful reason to research this planet would be because it is similar to earth, and a relative distance away. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7f887eeb1a31,C8D4EB858DA4,"The author also states that ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."". This shows the readers that Venus is worth studying because there may have been life on this planet. Therefore, NASA needs to send researchers to Venus to identify if there is life or not. The author gives another example by referencing Earth-like features to show that thesremay be some form of life or a way of nature, these references include Venus having mountains, valleys, and craters. This validates the authors point well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5947aef8bd79,C8D4EB858DA4,The author also gives ideas on how to help make a possible trip to Venus easier and less dangerous. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a8213cfb7e5b,C8D4EB858DA4,"They talk about using a bump-like vehicle that orbits or hovers about 30 miles above the surface. This vehicle has benefits, and also gives disclaimers. Some benefits would include astronauts being able to explore the land easier, avoiding the ""unfriendly"" ground, and keeping good air pressure. the text states ""however, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safey far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, redndering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective."" This shows as a disclaimer to give unbiased proof ofnegative effects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f6cb4bc524fa,C8D4EB858DA4,"This article is full of evidence to support the authors idea of studying Venus. The author referred to Earth, recommended ideas, and a technology project used with old computers to support their claim. In conclusion, this article had very well put-together evidence, and proves a point that Venus should be studied despite the dangers.          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5cdacf0d1968,C8E9D6F3C80A,"Rules are a basic principle in the world.
+
+If you follow the rules, you don't get in trouble.
+
+In school, there are some classes that require students to learn over the summer break through an assignment.
+
+The purpose of these summer assignments is to ensure that students are maintaining or learning knowledge that will be used in the class the following year. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b7504e0fc53c,C8E9D6F3C80A,Teacher-designed assignments are generally more effective than those created by students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+66fac9b2b507,C8E9D6F3C80A,"They provide an accurate workload, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+816018d5d851,C8E9D6F3C80A,"take more work off students, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+86ea8460c721,C8E9D6F3C80A,educate them through a teacher-designed assignment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e1032a50e7d,C8E9D6F3C80A,Teachers should continue to create and design the summer assignments in order to ensure that students are learning the information needed for the coming school year. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a408baaa7fbe,C8E9D6F3C80A,The amount of work dictated by a student-designed summer assignment is very likely to be little to none. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78586a276479,C8E9D6F3C80A,"Work is a concept that no student enjoys.
+
+If students were to create their own summer assignment, they would spend even more time thinking about what they would want to do rather than actually fulfilling the needed criteria.
+
+If a Junior in High School is assigned a summer assignment in which they have full control, they would need to create a meaningful and efficient piece of work that would assist them in maintaining and learning the information needed for the class.
+
+Assuming that the student has a rigorous summer schedule, where would they have the time to effectively plan and carry out a summer assignment in which they can comprehend the information necessary for the class? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf7bc1bd94f0,C8E9D6F3C80A,Creating the work needed for a summer assignment is no easy task. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72a7331aa155,C8E9D6F3C80A,"To effectively create the work, teachers need to understand the material, as well as understand which material is needed for the student to rehearse and learn over the summer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6648c5bce4b0,C8E9D6F3C80A,"Students can not effectively prepare themselves for the class over the summer if they have no idea what material they need to cover, as well as how to cover it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d2b2c3f2f8e,C8E9D6F3C80A,"Student-designed summer assignments can be reliable in some cases.
+
+If you're a rising Senior in High School then you could use the opportunity to help prepare yourself for the future.
+
+It would be a valuable learning experience that you could use in your life. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c58e87a45d27,C8E9D6F3C80A,"The problem is that the Seniors would continue to try and fudge their way through the system.
+
+They wouldn't be able to effectively learn and maintain the information if they are left to their own agendas.
+
+A student at Generic_School, Generic_Name, was told to do a project over the summer while following guidelines, while another student was told to just do a project.
+
+Both would take a test when they got back from break.
+
+Which student would most likely do better on the exam?
+
+The one who was assigned the guidelines, or the one that was more freelanced?
+
+Students need to follow guidelines in order to perform well on exams and the future. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1801371e12c3,C8E9D6F3C80A,"Summer assignments are not a favorite topic.
+
+When it comes to the whole idea of a summer assignment, we expect a teacher-based project that informs us on what information we need to learn and construct.
+
+Teacher-designed summer assignments allow for higher understanding of a subject, less overall work for students, and a more accurate workload that shows the knowledge of the student.
+
+Summer assignments are meant to help students learn and prepare for the next school year.
+
+They aren't meant to trick and deceive students into thinking that they can fudge their way through the course.
+
+Following the rules is how you will succeed.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+24cb65ce6b02,C8F439DC14CE,"My name is Luke Bomberger, and I joined the seagoing Cowboys program, and you should too. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d9bc04128443,C8F439DC14CE,"It helps animals that might not make it otherwise live until they get wherever they are going, then someone can take care of them and make sure that they are okay. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+789c575d9088,C8F439DC14CE,"All you have to do is feed them, clean them, and clean there stalls. It is not a hard job, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+eb814af8ec33,C8F439DC14CE,there is also plenty of time for sightseeing and other things once you arrive at your destination. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+db9d95a79f00,C8F439DC14CE,"It makes sure that they get to a place where someone will take good care of them, or use them for milk, meat, eggs, and other things. The seagoing Cowboys program is very useful. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2b67a678a04,C8F439DC14CE,"It doesn't even take long to clean there stalls if you keep up on the work. There is also sometime between pickups of the animals for yourself, or for playing with friends in the empty hold after animals have been delivered. Delivering the animals is always fun, seeing the smiling faces of the little kids riding there first horse, seeing there first cow, or anything else. It's guaranteed to bring a smile to your face. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+17acbdc17372,C8F439DC14CE,"and other things, such as riding a gondola in Venice, Italy, the city with streets of water. The sights you get to see are very beautiful sometimes, and tourist attractions are always fun to go see. It's an amazing thing to be able to see all of them while your still technically working. The sights are amazing, from mountains to mansions, you have the opportunity to see it all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5847ec776cf,C8F439DC14CE,"the seagoing Cowboys program is a very helpful thing, and it woul;d be wonderful if you joined. We always like a little extra muscle. It really is awesome to go sightseeing, get tours of famous places, and see all the tourist attractions that you wouldn't even have a small chance at seeing if you weren't a seagoing Cowboys. Please join us, and have some fun while your at it. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+176a054b9ef2,C8FCE2997372,"The conditions on venus aren't pretty. The tempertures get up to 800 degress fahrenheit. Humans can barely deal when it's a 100 degrees in Arizona. The carobon dioxide is so strong that we could survive it more than 10 minutes. Venus's surface tempertures are too hot to even walk on. Venus even has very dangerous weather like erruptng volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to proes seekng to land on it's surface. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fe0a1c067de,C8FCE2997372,"Where could we go if earth was to blow up? Mars. Venus or Mercury, We don't have a for sure answer to that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04a28fb82e5b,C8FCE2997372,Exploring Venus isn't a bad idea but very risky. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bc0b9b2bfa1c,C8FCE2997372,We could see what Venus has that could benefit ot affect Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6f6a4f94cfc,C8FCE2997372,Considering Earth is the closet planet to Earth. NASA could potentially send robots in the spacecraft to see what information they can give. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+951f4b7868e0,C8FCE2997372,"No ones life should have to be put on the line to explore a diffrent planet. I personally think its a great idea. As said in the passage ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.""         ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c10ca2ead0be,C91254C19BB8,"The Mona lisa demostration is relly intended to bring a simile to your face wihile .
+
+People are trying to do new ssttuf with new tecnology but some of this peoiple dont know that some times they do need to have or use tecnology they want to just do things as there way but some times they do need to use tecnology and do what they have to do so they can fix the old stuff and new stuff the monalisa just a little simle but they can fixii it withtecnology and try to do some thinh new they have to look for more tecnology and expressions to be sure that they are doing whta they have to do in expression of the wghat they have and maind. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+47d0b11e5156,C91254C19BB8,The doctor said that they dcan fix the or modify the expression or lesson from what they are talking about . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f12dfd3a26a,C91254C19BB8,"They are trying to said that they want to invent a computer that knows when are you happy and when you are sad or angry and other caind of emottions.
+
+each they there are trying to have new tecnology and new stuff they have to see whats goin on in that they have to do what they have to do.
+
+Other peopl;e dont like to see other people expressions because they get enoy from seeintg them.
+
+They are seeing video games and trying to see what can they do to modofy them . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+88ece25a72c1,C91254C19BB8,Seeing you in the miriror each they its like you are trying to see something diffirent that you can see becuse alreddy has the face that you have to see even tho they are not in the same expression ecah day becuse some times your actitud your face your simile arte the ones that can change with aout let you know each day you will hav a expressions that will change your face ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4632c02bdce0,C971348C6C99,You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ee94b2dea2d9,C971348C6C99,"you will be able to see many sights, and you do not need to fight in the war ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f18b0706861e,C971348C6C99,You will also help many people by doing this job ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a8d009a41ed,C971348C6C99,It is an unbelievable opportunity for many people to in joy helping people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5edbd891d563,C971348C6C99,you can also tour places all over the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88f999938f5d,C971348C6C99,being a seagoing cowboy is much more than an adventure it is also a lot of work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ce285f597d1,C971348C6C99,"you will also find time to have fun,especially on return trips after the animals have been unloaded. The UNRRA hired us seagoing cowboy to take care of horses,young cows,and mules. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+896ddcdfd6a7,C971348C6C99,so far I have told you about all the good things about being a seagoing cowboy it is also dangerous. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b29147c56dd8,C971348C6C99,"
+On my second trip I was the night watchman my job was to report to the captian every hour to tell him how the animals were doing one rainy night I was making my hourly report
+
+I slid down a slippery ladder and craked one of my ribs ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ade121baf5c,C971348C6C99,"That is only some of the resons to join us sea going cowboys.
+
+The other resones you will have to figur out your self.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+88bd7c58ca31,C978BF282141,The author is very convinceing he didnt just say whats good nor did he say all what is bad. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8df741e1b4ca,C978BF282141,From the text he made the evidce of how Venus has made it difficult to walk on or be near. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+75fee9d23207,C978BF282141,He siad that the prussure and the heat is even difficult for the bots that scincetist had made. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+224ca9893565,C978BF282141,He also siad that NASA is compelling an idea that sends human to study Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d5987e935080,C978BF282141,"they are trying to make a blump-like vehicle 30 or so miles above the rollong venusian. It would still be 170 degess fahrenheit. Thought the presuure would only be as sea levels on earth.
+
+NASA even may bring old technology called Mechanical Cumputers they were first envisiond in the 1800s and played and important role in the 1940 during World War ll. they are not like the smart phones or cumputers we have. Mechanical Cumputerscan can last in heat even longer. They work with gears and levers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+736daa761c21,C978BF282141,The author did make good points. Which are convinceing and to be honest I wish I would go now just to see what it looks like. He proved that there is more then one way to prove that we can study venus even if we cant see it in person. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+feb8715a33d9,C987753AC378,Gas prices. Car notes. Parking fines. These are all expensive things you have to pay for when you consider owning a car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0841d7de0e9e,C987753AC378,"Most family get rid of their cars because of having to pay these high prices in order to keep their cars.
+
+There are a couple of car free cities;for example German Suburbs is car free because of expensive fees they would have to pay just to have a space to park in,.""but there are only two places to park-large garages at the edge of the development,where a car-owner buys a space,for $40,000,along with a home.""These families would have to spend $40,000 along just to park their car in a large garage,it makes it easy for them to make the decision not to own a car because prices are so high. Having to buy a parking space for that much and still having to buy a home along with the $40,000 can cause a lot of stress on family providers because they have to basically spend all their money on one high priced item;a CAR! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e158798c047c,C987753AC378,You can become much happier without a car knowing that you don't have to spend all your money on this one item that could break down on you at anything ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d793587787aa,C987753AC378,"As a result,70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here."". For example, this mother of two is much happier without owning a car,""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.""The mother of two became much happier because she no longer had to pay these high fines,fees,gas prices,and car notes that others had to pay for. It was other was to get around that you didn't have to bother coming out of pocket for such as,""Public transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday. This was a big help to limiting car usage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa822ed7e3f6,C987753AC378,"Studies show that the percentage of driving has dropped tremendously from 2005 to 2013. Most of the reason for the driving percentage dropping was gas prices;It began to get to high,President Obama tried to do something about it as much as he could.""President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions,unveiled.""Fewer cars were seen on the roads driving,""recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars,driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.""It caused people to not drive their cars and take public transortation or not go anywhere at all. It got to the point where""cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3224bc11b60f,C987753AC378,Some of the advantages to limiting car usage ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7c5cc5866bfe,C987753AC378,"are just what us as Americans want/need to hear because its really expensive. It's not just about buying a car and running it off of air;your car takes gas,car notes,needs servicing every once in a while it's not easy owning a car. Studies show how much the driving percentaged dropped keeps dropping because of high expensive prices that we have to pay to own a car. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aa42588cfc41,C996FC0CBE10,"If i was a scientist at NASA and i had to support thr fact that i think the face is a naturual landform I would empasize that, Life on ars is not likely becuase it has not beeen proven. Just because there are items or land marks that lead to life on Mars does not mean there has been any. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c89dfee51e21,C996FC0CBE10,"Theface is indeed a natrual landform, how? ",Position,Adequate,,,
+22441ecdeb71,C996FC0CBE10,"because if you go by the diffrent images included in the article you notice the cleared the images,the face slowly dissapears or fade away. The Face can also appear by things in spaces or objects reflecting unto the mesa. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77eb0019d672,C996FC0CBE10,There are many landforms in Mars and the Face happens to be one. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+072b7d70df13,C996FC0CBE10,For people to say that aliens are the ones causing it to look like a Face is also a arguement. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f614840f73cf,C996FC0CBE10,"Why ould support this detail? because of so many life forms on Earth people assume that someone had to make that happen. Perhaps aliens did indeeds have something to do with the ""Face"" , why would they make so clearly and if they did , why did updated cameras show that the clearer the image the face slowly decided to dissapear. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f002d309448a,C996FC0CBE10,On the other hand there are people who support the fact that the Face is just another landform on Mars. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0aa15a4b2293,C996FC0CBE10,"Well as you can tell Mars always had many landforms and The Face happens to be one. How can you prove that? people might ask. Well when Viking caught the images of the Face, ot certainally goes along with the fact that it does look like a FAce but agai the clearer the image got, the face slowly dissaper. When the face does disspear, slowly the landform starts to look like all the other landforms on
+
+Mars or mesas. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18a7e27d1ae8,C996FC0CBE10,"Mant people doubt the fact that it is alien, why? because you usually do not see aliens in sight, unless you are watching a movie or reading a book about them. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+da5aa6ac09d4,C996FC0CBE10,"Aliens could hav eindeed built it , but there has not been an actual sighting on aliens anywhere on Earth, and aliens are usually portrayed as bad people or ting sin movies or books so seeing that a Face on Mars is created by a alien would be kind of frightning because if they are portrayes as bad thing , why would they want a face on a landform. What does that mean? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+475badb93dad,C996FC0CBE10,Now on my side of the story or opinion it clearly looks like a landform ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b4ca2f7cbff6,C996FC0CBE10,"and the way it got it's ""face"" was by something reflecting off an object and making it seem like someone had of built that,
+
+But again. those images do not show anything about a face and how could have ""aliens"" buolt something so clearly and so presised. The clues just don't go together. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78b51d306f43,C996FC0CBE10,"In conclusion until realistic facts are proven i would stick wit the face that these are natrual landforms and ""aliens"" had nothing to with the fact that they built it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+64f03b4e19bb,C9AC065BB597,"Do you belive in weird landforms?
+
+I believe in them because they didn't just come from any where. Also there are many landforms on the planet Earth. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+eab866de02de,C9AC065BB597,The face on Mars is a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e23083dcfc42,C9AC065BB597,"This is a natural landform because in paragraph 2 it states ""Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92baf32bb853,C9AC065BB597,If it was created by aliens then wouldn't they at least mark or show a sign that it's theirs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02d7ac104852,C9AC065BB597,They did mark that it was theirs by making it a face. Then why does it look like a human face? It looks lik a human face because maybe thats how they saw the first human. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7daff45a8056,C9AC065BB597,I believe in weird landforms because it would make since that they would get there from either destrution of something else or creation of another landform. But why doesn't NASA send a space rover to mars to scan the face and collect some samples from it? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fb8c8a2ffcd8,CA2987A57568,"During school, projects are normally done throughout the course to show a student's understanding of a subject. Most schools don't assign summer projects for the student body since summer is supposed to be the break time. Some schools do give out summer projects, but keep in mind, the projects themselves, despite being assigned during break, aren't usually designed by students. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+91760241199b,CA2987A57568,Summer projects should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5558353d0e8c,CA2987A57568,"people work better with ideas they're familiar with, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3bfe44f87397,CA2987A57568,"this gives students more freedom with subjects for a project, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+522d2f7e6f91,CA2987A57568,students are more willing to do something they want to do or research. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+26413d2ea723,CA2987A57568,Making a project on a familiar concept means students would be able to write more in-depth about it. They'd also be able to understand it better since looking something up doesn't always give you enough info about a subject. Imagine trying to write a in-depth analysis on Didgeridoos when you've never even heard of one or even have background information on instruments. Familiarity with your work makes it come to you naturally and having the freedom to choose the subject of a project is important. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e235522c2968,CA2987A57568,"Most of the time, teacher-assigned projects would have all the students doing or researching the same thing. While this makes the assignment easier to grade and gives everyone a common goal, some people want to look somewhere else. Choosing your subject could bring about interesting results and give you a new interest rather than just being given the generic science project where you monitor and grow a small plant for x amount of time. Working on something you, personally, picked out could also inspire you to put more work into the assignment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c57bfe2aca5d,CA2987A57568,"Researching a subject that interests you, rather than something else, would make anyone more productive. There are lots of ideas people would look further into if prompted and this would be that prompt. Students would be able to enjoy looking up information on subjects interesting to them and put them on paper. They'd be able to turn in a well-written paper and get a good grade just for researching a fun subject. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b11bb0c8f045,CA2987A57568,"having students create their own summer projects would be highly beneficial towards productivity on said project. The benefits outweight the negatives and more students would work harder on these projects. Being limited to certain ideas will make it so students don't try as hard to think outside the box. This type of work also helps students find things they're interested in for later. All of these things would help them work better and earn better results, but they'd also find more information and learn better this way ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+88837a86eada,CA5DB05415A5,It has become a common practice today for many people to use their phones while driving. They try to be as efficient as possible with their time and see no problem with trying to multitask when operating a vehicle. Some text on their phones while others may take calls or check emails. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4c8b8b34b851,CA5DB05415A5,In no regard is this a safe practice and drivers should not be allowed to use a phone under any circumstance as it only amount to a more dangerous driving environment ,Position,Effective,,,
+61e298c37ad3,CA5DB05415A5,Often times crashes are the result of distracted driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+730da5498899,CA5DB05415A5,"This usually occurs in teenage age groups who have a commitment to checking their phones while driving. Teenagers assume that by taking their eyes off of the road for solely two seconds, they aren't putting themselves or anyone else in danger. In reality, distracted driving via cell phone use ""reduces the amount of brain activity associated with driving by 37 percent,"" (""Cell Phones""). Taking calls or texting confidently reduces a driver's ability to control a vehicle, respond to driving events, and direct attention to the roadway. This isn't the case for just teenagers. These conditions apply to every driver who attempts to use their cell phone while driving, thus creating a dangerous driving environment. People often drive with family members, close friends, or children in the car. The chance of a fatal crash because of distracted driving is high and it is very possible that these family members, close friends, and children could be injured or worse. It is much safer to restrict all phone use while driving in order to ensure that roadways remain safe. By not using a cell phone, a driver is better able to pay attention, less likely to crash, and following the law (""Cell Phones""). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+950502c741b7,CA5DB05415A5,Many states have already offered consolation for the distracted driving problem in the United States. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09c5204a7914,CA5DB05415A5,"For instance, Georgia enacted Joshua's Law in 2007 requiring 16 year old drivers to complete driver's ed. The state also recently approved the Hands-Free law, which in essence eliminated any and all distracted driving practices. States recognize the problems that come with cell phone use while driving and have taken steps to fix them. This is evidence enough that in no way, shape, or form should drivers be allowed to use cell phones while operating a vehicle. For further support, there are about 9 people killed and 1,000 injured daily in the United States because of distracted driving (""The Dangers of Distracted Driving""), thus the popularity of cell phone use while driving is a damaging practice in the U.S. and should be ended immediately. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88f5a533a6fe,CA5DB05415A5,"Although cell phones may be used in a beneficial manner while driving, such as GPS use, crime reporting, or roadside assistance, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9bdedac78269,CA5DB05415A5,"it is a more viable and safe practice to prohibit its use until a person it not behind the wheel of a vehicle. A person only puts themselves in more danger, even when doing something appropriate with a cellphone when operating a vehicle, by trying to utilize it and maintain focus on the road at the same time. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+f336c396a5b4,CA5DB05415A5,"In sum, it is in the most obvious interest of all drivers that cell phone use while driving be prohibited in any way or form. It is a dangerous practice that puts family, kids, and friends in immediate danger. Any benefits that are noted of cell phone use while driving are miniscule compared to the risk one takes by even looking at a phone for two seconds. Considering states have had enough common sense to begin a prohibition of the practice in favor of all drivers' safety, it is more than adequate to say that drivers should in no manner be given the opportunity to contribute a fatal driving environment by using a cell phone. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+61082d2a008d,CAC4E6021973,"Since the birth of the internet and social media, the world has shifted to greatly favor the innovators and the free-thinkers. Society no longer demands students to find one subject they are good at, go to college to study that subject, and then get a middle class job in that field. While performing one skill at a very high level still holds value, the most successful people are those who can think ahead of the curve, those who can think of the next Amazon, the next Netflix, the next Uber, the next big thing. So, how does that relate to whether we have student-designed or teacher-designed summer school projects? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c8ed865105a6,CAC4E6021973,"letting students design their own projects gives them more freedom, allowing them to think outside the box, which aids the development of valuable skills that are applicable in the real world. Instead of teaching students how to follow directions on a rubric, we should be teaching them to think creatively and how to collaborate with one another. ",Position,Effective,,,
+3dcd81fc3bf9,CAC4E6021973,Allowing students to design their own projects gives them far more freedom than a teacher-designed project ever could ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6ef6129c0343,CAC4E6021973,"Keeping students on a leash forces them to wear a one size fits all education. Each student is different; they all have different strengths, different weaknesses, different motivations, and different goals. That is why we need to give them tailored education. Giving students this freedom would allow them to create a project that works well for them, and more importantly on a topic they are actually interested in. If we let students do a topic they enjoy, the results will be far better compared to when they are forced to learn about something they have no long term interest in. The freedom students gain from designing their own projects is far more valuable than just following the directions their teachers gave them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+692097c37e77,CAC4E6021973,Making students design their own projects encourages them to learn how to think creatively ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e89a6afba1e7,CAC4E6021973,"Arguably, the most valuable skill in today's society is the ability to be able to bring a new unique perspective and thought process to any discussion. That is not a skill that can be obtained by constantly being told what to do and how to do it. Students need to learn for themselves how to go to the drawing board, find out which ideas are bad, which ones are good, and then create a plan to execute the good ones. That is not something that can be spoon fed in the classroom. That's why student designed summer projects are the perfect opportunity for schools to do their part in teaching students how to think creatively. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a1f61674731c,CAC4E6021973,When forced to come up with their own ideas and think creatively students will develop and enhance skills they would have never had the teacher been the one designing the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+909f313bb6f6,CAC4E6021973,"For example, if it is a partner project these two students will have to learn how to collaborate together to design a project, designate jobs to each other, and hold each other accountable for their share of the work. That kind of collaboration never would have occurred had the teacher done all that for them. When students go on to college and into their professional career they will have to learn skills like collaboration, because they won't have someone doing it for them. That is why it is important we take the time to prepare them for than now. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43f07db4a73c,CAC4E6021973,"A wise man once said, ""don't follow where the path may lead, but go where there is no path and leave a trail."" I believe that quote perfectly represents how we want our students to think. The skills developed through out of the box thinking which can be achieved by allowing students the freedom to design their own projects is far more valuable out in the real world then anything the teacher could prepare.        ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+58d9d241cfda,CAD2B46606E7,The author tells us how hard and difficult it is to land or even study venus because its so hard to land on or get close to because of all the dangerous things that can happen. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9fd4943c45f7,CAD2B46606E7,"venus is a very worthy planet to study because nobody has ever been on it to know if there is any kind of life ont hat planet , or if plants can grow or anything. because its the closest planet to earth but the hardest to land on. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+910ba5fbe431,CAD2B46606E7,"because venus really used to be covered with oceans and etc just like earth and nobody can really tell what it looks like now theres just alot of curocity. a bunch of people wondering what it looks like.
+
+but venus is covered with a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets. But its even more challenging with the clouds and highly corrosive sulfuric acid.
+
+But on the surface of venus temperatures average around 800 degrees fahrenheit , and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3e43df3c759,CAD2B46606E7,venus is a hard planet to study but it is very worth it. Becayse there are alot of things you can descover about venus and alot of people that would love to know whats really on venus.        ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6c103385844a,CAE63BBF4546,Do you know what the challenge of Exploring Venus is? Well venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus distance but safe vantage point of Earth has very challenging place to examine more closely. They also often called Venus as the Earth's Twin. Let's see what The Challenge of Exploring Venus is all about. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e4e6c8506a92,CAE63BBF4546,"First of all,
+
+Earth, Venus , Mars are like neighbor that orbits the sun at different speeds. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+265509d71438,CAE63BBF4546,The differences in speed that we are closer to Mars than other times to Venus. Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms. Humans has numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud -draped world. Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more tha a few hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+226d88a1a03a,CAE63BBF4546,"Secondly, The thick atmosphere is almost 97% of carbon dioxide that blankets Venus. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eed4c83a13e7,CAE63BBF4546,The more challenging are the clouds of highly sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's temps are average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than our own planet. The conditions on Earth are far more extreme than anything humans encounter. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dbde4f5a5efe,CAE63BBF4546,"Thirdly,
+
+NASA has one particularly compelling ideas to send humans to study Venus. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d3b2ce9b2ecc,CAE63BBF4546,"NASA's solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus allow scientist to float above the fray. Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Many researchers are working on innovations that allows our machines to last long enough to knowledge Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37365368e4eb,CAE63BBF4546,"In a conclusion, Do you know what the challenge of Exploring Venus is? Well, Earth, Venus , Mars are like neighbor that orbits the sun at different speeds. The thick atmosphere is almost 97% of carbon dioxide that blankets Venus. NASA has one particularly compelling ideas to send humans to study Venus. So however, I just exploring about Venus so I think I past the challenge.       ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7a5bca812daa,CAE7D71D66A3,"Instead of having the same boring schedule every day of going to school, home, repeat, imagine being able to dress up for home games with your sports team, or hanging out with friends after school to work on the plans for the yearbook! ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4451f175779c,CAE7D71D66A3,Adding the rule that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity would be a fantastic way to make sure that students are getting involved with their school. ,Position,Effective,,,
+60b1beebe61f,CAE7D71D66A3,"There are so many choices for everyone in the school. From sports, to crafting, Future Business Leaders, and many more, students are sure to find something that they enjoy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c38c5238a0b,CAE7D71D66A3,Doing extracurricular activities can help make friends ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f38793622d91,CAE7D71D66A3,keep you active ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cce48eae7d6c,CAE7D71D66A3,form a second family away from home ,Claim,Effective,,,
+395a557d8eb1,CAE7D71D66A3,It can also help you later in life with time management skills ,Claim,Effective,,,
+84b034f06b0a,CAE7D71D66A3,help keep your grades up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c69526961718,CAE7D71D66A3,It's hard to make friends at school because of constant changing classes and so many people split up. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66c3c8a16f24,CAE7D71D66A3,"Being on a team, you know that people have your back during a game. After being involved with the same group of people, you start to form a bond that makes everyone so close. Having an outlet with people that you know, and are close to, can really have a positive impact on you're life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+403178be659c,CAE7D71D66A3,"Later on in life, students will remember the work that they put in, and remember the friendships that they made ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4cf9fbb126e7,CAE7D71D66A3,"This includes having to wake up early to go to a practice, or meeting. Also being organized and prepared is a big part of the responsibilities that come with joining a group. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41d812bec841,CAE7D71D66A3,"To be allowed to be in extracurricular activities, you must be a student in good standing. Which means you need to be passing all your classes in order to do anything before of after school. This rule makes students strive to have better grades so that they are able to participate. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2c7e7085c49b,CAE7D71D66A3,"There are mostly benefits when it comes to having this addition to the schools policy, it would be a very smart thing to put in place. From making new friends, to doing better in school and later on in life, the schools fresh and more positive environment will be full of hardworking and high striving students. The involvement in organizations has a lot bigger of an impact than you think. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a13d92ecb5a0,CB66B685DAF6,"Your principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity . For example , students could participate in sports ,
+
+work on the yearbook ,
+
+or serve on the student council . 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5e4022e93247,CB66B685DAF6,I agree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ea03caf70db,CB66B685DAF6,every student should be athletic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d6dcb7c67cf,CB66B685DAF6,"It's good because it could distract them from all the negative things going on in the school . Being athletic sets a good look on you especially if your good at the sport , its also a good way to make friends . It also helps to get focus off of so many things . Doing sports makes you only have to focus on keeping your grade to stay in that sport . It may also be good for stress it could possibly relieve it and it makes you feel great . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba613e962dcd,CB66B685DAF6,Working on a yearbook may not be that interesting or entertaining to most students but it still a good way to set a good look on yourself ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27c27c7d0da6,CB66B685DAF6,"Not everyone thinks yearbook is fun but everyone has their own opinions it's a great distraction . Yearbook club also helps you meet new people , yearbook club is not really a sport but it's still something someone could feel good about doing . It could possibly seem boring to you but , if you like to take pictures there's one positive thing about yearbook club that you could like . It's always good to try something don't be so original , it's okay to find out what your good at and what your not . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e17382f1b197,CB66B685DAF6,"Working as student council is a really good outlook , people would come to you about things they need help with ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3278dcc9b01,CB66B685DAF6,"It's always good to help people students would like you more . People would look at you as a friend that they could always come to if they needed to talk , or if they needed someone to talk to about something personal . It sets a good role model for you , a lot of younger kids look up to you . You should always treat people they way that you wanted to be treated . Working as a student council means people come to you about things they would never go to anyone else about . They trust you with their secrets and they trust your to give them good advice . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d3c8c1193159,CB66B685DAF6,"The main reason the principal would want their students to do more sports is to keep them out of stuff , get their mindset off of the negative things ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc7b6ea21981,CB66B685DAF6,"Doing sports or something you are interested in makes you feel good , and it makes other people look at you in a positive way . It's good to try new things and to explore, do things different sometimes . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9d5a6bc5293,CB774DEF3A4B,"Venus is considered the most comprable planet to our own, Earth. It is the closest in size and density, and sometimes the closest in distance too. There have been many attempts to explore Earth's ""twin"" with unmanned spacecrafts, but none have ever survived after the first few hours of landing on Venus. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d386d9cf18cf,CB774DEF3A4B,The author does not support her claim that Venus is worth studying despite the dangers it presents ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c03890ecf11c,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author has written in problem/solution format and gives solutions to the problem that Venus is too dangerous for humans to study. Although they give the problem and solution, they do not give enough evidence to support their claim. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f27c620b1ec3,CB774DEF3A4B,"For example, ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors"" (The Challenge 8). This evidence is only given in the last paragraph of the article and is not mentioned anywhere else. Also, the author lists many of the dangers of traveling to Venus, but does not dictate why it is worth the risk of exploring the planet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+72202a66eabe,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author also suggests that Venus is a good candidate for exploration because of it's occasional proximity to Earth. ""...sometimes [Venus is] our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel"" (The Challenge 4). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f7067eb031dc,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author does give reasons on why exploring Venus would be beneficial, but those reasons do not outweigh the dangers of the endeavor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc54009dbd7c,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author says even if they could get a spacecraft close enough to Venus and for it to be survivable for humans, there would be only limited insight on ground conditions: ""... most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective"" (The Challenge 6). The author does not support her claim even further because after proposing a solution to the problem, there would not be any valuable data gained from a journey that is already very dangerous ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+66b55efb7104,CB774DEF3A4B,"
+Numerous dangers have been listed on the exploration of Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18b5e20227f6,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author mentions that no spacecraft has survived on Venus: ""...no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours"" (The Challenge 2). Since these missions have been unmanned, there is not much loss except for the spacecraft itself, but if there had been a human aboard, the loss would be tremendous and nothing would be gained from the mission. The conditions of Venus simply will not allow manned missions for closer examination of the planet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f80fa8bdeb7,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author goes on to list the physical dangers of Venus: ""On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet"" (The Challenge 3). On Venus, the temperature alone could liquify many metals and completely destroy spacecrafts that were sent there. Also, the pressure of the atmosphere could crush a submarine fit for diving to the deepest parts of the ocean. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18f0718f53ac,CB774DEF3A4B,"The author does not support her claim that Venus is worth studying despite the dangers it presents. First, the author only mentions support for her claim in the last paragraph of the article. Second, the author presents a solution to the problem, but says that no data can be gained from the experience because of the conditions of Venus. Third, the author presents the dangers of exploring Venus, and those dangers outweigh the benefits of exploring the planet. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5b74ea57d087,CB86688CF491,Using this technology is valuable to read peoples emotions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+625378f41a41,CB86688CF491,"The doctors and prof. say that the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-d computer model of the face;all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit. Also Dr. huang observes that artists such as da vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+10dd8204ce6e,CB86688CF491,"Dr. Huang also stated that most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication. Dr. Huang also gave some examples of what movments to do in front of a mirror. For example raise your lips at the corners of your mouth. second squint your eyes slightly,to produce wrinkling (""crow's-feet"") at the corners of your eyes. Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up,toward your eyes. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a045a316eec,CB86688CF491,"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In the real smile, the Zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. Meanwhile,muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the Zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+73216bf87cdc,CB86688CF491,So based on what i put down on this final draft my claim is that this kind of technology is valuable. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ada10be56c76,CBA185D3B277,"I think that the ""Facial Action Coding System"" may actually be valuable. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6a9617835610,CBA185D3B277,The machine detects emotions from using a picture and that can help with knowing how a person feels. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61b843beccda,CBA185D3B277,"The machine uses the muscles in your face to detect your emotions, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b98e41dc5f64,CBA185D3B277,it calulates all emotions found ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63b282053424,CBA185D3B277,has most of the common emotions so the FACS has a very good chance of being accurate and valuable. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bf300840aec,CBA185D3B277,The machine uses the muscles in your face to detect emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9fe88c864ff,CBA185D3B277,"This is useful because different muscles makes different emotions, In the article the athour explained how the machine can tell if someone was happy or not. ""To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ""smiling"" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful."" That explains that even if the person tries to change their emotion the real one will still be seen because of the muscles that they are using. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+255b142f2d12,CBA185D3B277,"The ""Facial Action Coding System"" calulates all the emotions found in the persons face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1802180af69,CBA185D3B277,"Since the machine can calulate all the emotions it has a better chance if getting the right exact emotion the person is feeling and get all the emotions. This machine would be about to detect how any person is feeling and can show up at 6 emotions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+74dc2722ccbd,CBA185D3B277,With the machine being able to caluate your emotions its able to detect up to 6 different emotions that people use everyday ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d345e4ef609,CBA185D3B277,"""She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. That was a discription of the Mona Lisa painting that the FACS gave. This shows how many differnt emotions she had and the machine was able to pick them all up. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d1c524290360,CBA185D3B277,"The Facial Action Coding System is usefully when it comes to trying to figure out someone elses emotions. The machine uses the muscles in your face to detect your emotions, it calulates all emotions found, and has most of the common emotions so the FACS has a very good chance of being accurate and valuable. I personally think this device is a good idea and that it may be really accurate in finding emotions. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7dbfd7c8072,CBBDC9BB3F04,The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2bde1ea42ec3,CBBDC9BB3F04,becasue people are intrested in how the solar system works today. Venus can be very intresting if it's something you like to learn about ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1057b61cad4,CBBDC9BB3F04,"As the Article says ""On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet."" Knowing we couldn't go there maybe people lose intrest in the planet, but there's a lot more to learn about it. There are some positive things about the planet that you might know or maybe you could learn. Venus is one of the hottest plantes we haveand it could be very dangrous, but it also has some futures just like earth does. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9073d609a668,CBBDC9BB3F04,"Venus is the second planet from the sun and knowing that it's so close must mean that it really is hot. But also, as i have said it's really simmular to Earth ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce2694968b1a,CBBDC9BB3F04,"As is says in the article ""It may have well been the most Earth-like planet."" Also they have said that Venus has some feature that are just like earth ""The planet has a suface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features like valleys, moutains, and craters."" Knowing a little about Venus you have so much more to learn. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca4d88c9b2d6,CBBDC9BB3F04,"If your looking a Venus from a far because you can't go on it, and neither could the spaceships...you can't really get a good look at the ground or the planet itself. So there may be something else that's intresting about venus that we don't know yet. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7a1daedee855,CBBDC9BB3F04,As I have read in the text it was saying that NASA is working on new ways to study venus. NASA has always found a way to create something that will last on the planets that we want to explore. Venus is intrestiong because it so hot even some of the objects they want to use they can't. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c22accb1092,CBBDC9BB3F04,"Reading about venus I have learned a lot, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4f93065b5a94,CBBDC9BB3F04,"like venus is one of the brightestv points in the sky and when it gets dark you coould see it. Something new as the article says they are trying to figure out whats strong enough to last in venus's conditions. Today they use powerful computers, as it says in the article ""Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible and quick."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84296725398e,CBBDC9BB3F04,Today they are learing new ways and soon you'll know more about Venus.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+159ebf6feae2,CC02E6A858C4,Thomas Haung made a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model for the face. All 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscels. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e53503bb87fa,CC02E6A858C4,I think this system should be added in schools because during school teachers will know how their students are feeling. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+da7989368725,CC02E6A858C4,In the passage it states that a teacher points out that this system can recognize when a student is confused or bored. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15f1d1828008,CC02E6A858C4,"This system is really useful in my opinion, because you can recognize all emotions someone is feeling. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+35b9d35765ef,CC02E6A858C4,You can recognize by looking at them but only 1 or 2. with this new system you can find them all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15ec00db5aac,CC02E6A858C4,Another reason why this system is a good idea is because even if the person is trying to hide their emotions you can still find it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58849989a2a6,CC02E6A858C4,This new sytem is a great idea/invention. this needs to be known. mor people need to know about this amazing idea. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aef79e2a9c0f,CC02E6A858C4,"All in all, i think this is a great system and they should add it to schools. It will help teachers and students. You will recognize every emotion the student feels. It can help lots of people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66fd78682947,CC06612E842A,I think having every student be in a extracurricular activity is a great idea and i completely agree with the principal ,Position,Effective,,,
+43b5554871bd,CC06612E842A,"Students might not have any plans after school, but what would be better than being in a after school club with a group of your peers. Or for athletic students they could be on one of the sports teams. Having students be in a extracurricular activity is a win-win in every situation ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db09a80021de,CC06612E842A,"I think students should be in at least one extracurricular activity because, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9d8e2a9f11fc,CC06612E842A,"it could help students with their school work, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+616c79ed52a3,CC06612E842A,"it can be a opportunity for students to become more social and make new friends, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+28a7afd3dcda,CC06612E842A,and it could help students get to know the school and staff and make the school a better learning environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+064020615fc1,CC06612E842A,Some students might need help in some of their classes ,Claim,Effective,,,
+df4e04a39ed7,CC06612E842A,"So because of that reason they could be in an extracurricular club like study hall or homework club. Students could help each other master the material by reading it over with each other or quizzing each other on the material. If a student cant be with a teacher after school for whatever reason they could go to a student in their class for help. Sometimes getting help from one of your classmates can be better than getting help from a teacher. These are ways students could get help in school from having extracurricular activities and have more success in their classes. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4d6aadd40b13,CC06612E842A,"By being in a extracurricular activity like book club or yearbook, it could be an opportunity for students to become more social and meet new people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffc7a9c425ea,CC06612E842A,"Some students could be quiet and anti-social but, by being in these activities they could meet new friends and people to talk to at school. They could meet those who they share common interest like video games for example and could bond over those things. Or people who like sports and like to talk about sports. Extracurricular activities can be a great way for students to bond and get to know the people they go to school with. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56a7d489dcbb,CC06612E842A,Being in these extracurricular activities students can get to know the school and staff better and make their school a better learning environment for themselves and others. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+22f0fba0806d,CC06612E842A,"Some students might not know a lot of information about the school they're attending. But with these activities students can connect with their teachers and staff on a deeper level and get to know them more. This could also help them in the classroom. By knowing more about their school they could contribute to making their school a better learning, safe, and fun environment to be in. This is how being in an extracurricular activity can help students get to know their school, the people that work there, and make the school a better environment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e10f073e311e,CC06612E842A,"
+I think having every student be in a extracurricular activity is a great idea and it should be implemented into the school. There are a lot of great things and opportunities coming from this decision. It can help students more than just academically. It can also help them socially. They can connect more with their school and make it a better place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+796b1bbd791c,CC3A5AD37340,In my opinion i feel like the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+138eaac5ef73,CC3A5AD37340,I think its not a good idea of technology reading our emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1cd067487bf,CC3A5AD37340,"Some people do have hard time showing their feelings but its either because they are hurt or scared. Others just show their feelings and emotions. Those are the kind of people that have been hurt but still move on with their lifes. Might take them a couple of days, weeks, months or maybe even years. This generation has changed there is a lot of technology now days. Us as humans we do what we like and work on what we like to do he express our emotions on what we do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d46881237937,CC3A5AD37340,On the other hand using technology is kind of a good idea for people that have trouble showing their feelings and emotions are the kind of people that would us technology ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7db1f7a2913a,CC3A5AD37340,These kind of people that are scared to show their emotions would get this so they could get a little help to try to show their emotions. But for another reason the same people that have hard time showing their emotions are the one who would probably not use technology. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+562b0a313ccf,CC3A5AD37340,"For example using technology to show the Mone Lisa painting emotions would be 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguste, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ba3d5652016,CC3A5AD37340,"All of that doesnt sound right why not just express what you feel your emotions, Just be yourselfs ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fcb2486e020f,CC3A5AD37340,On the other hand another reason why people are scared to show their emotions and feelings is because the care about what other people think about them ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+11678fafbdba,CC3A5AD37340,"That is one thing people should not care about do whatever makes you happy making good decisions. But happy is what everyone needs to be we only live once and why not spend it with the ones we love and that make us happy, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4f45edba6469,CC54E936E3FA,This essay is on if I think the use of technlogy to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4618b7f01487,CC54E936E3FA,"I believe It is valuable and heres why . 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+37b27b782185,CC54E936E3FA,I believe the use of tehcnology to read students expressions is valuable because as a studnt myslf i know how it feel to have to do a computer assignment and not get whats going on or its moving to fast so u get frustrated or angry ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1791992a6b9a,CC54E936E3FA,.If they were able to put that in school computers i feel more kids will do better in school . Like if my facial exprassions are showing a teacher some they cant really get it because they are humans ad they cant really read faces s good as a computer could . Now on the other hand you have this computer that when i look confused it is willing to slow down or break things down more simplier for me and me only . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8957ce0b8d70,CC54E936E3FA,I feel sometimes thats all kids need is extra help because honestly im a student that needs extra help thats only a little bit of the reasons why i think that is valuable ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+38dae65b8c82,CC54E936E3FA,"Students facial expressions show everything you need to know you just have to get something to catch them . Of course they are going to have to make sure its spot on . What if i completely understanding everything and then they start to break it down then what ? Because tehcnology is not perfect . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b92bf93e8ebc,CC54E936E3FA,That is a counter arguement someone can make . What if my facial expression is showing one thing but im feeling a different way ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+78b31dafae99,CC54E936E3FA,Technology always has a bug or something that nees to be fixed . So whoeer makes this needs to make sure that it is perfect . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14ad50e5898a,CC54E936E3FA,Thats why i think this ablility to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ffcc610e8795,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"Actress and singer Audrey Hepburn once remarked, ""Nothing is impossible. The word itself say I'm possible!"" The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" agrees. They claim that although venturing to a planet that is seeminly un-explorable is dangerous, it is also a worthwhile and necessary mission. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d883f16de285,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"By justifying why it is crucial to continue our efforts to explore Venus, and additionally through their explanation as to how this can safely be accomplished, the author of this article strongly supports their idea that studying Venus is a noble pursuit despite the many obstacles that it creates. ",Position,Effective,,,
+9b28d6323711,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"One way that the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" supports their claim is by explaining the sheer value and benefit of going to Venus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b346560f63b2,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"While it is true that several conditions on Venus' surface are inhospitable and unable to support or sustain human life, the author claims that ""astronomers are fascniated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,"" (para 4). This might lead to discoveries that could help us understand or predict Earth's future evolution patterns. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5305c67434d1,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"Besides this, Venus is at times the closest planet to Earth as ""Earth, Venus and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus,"" (2). This could be extremely beneficial to both the inhabitants of earth and for future space travel because Venus will sometimes be our ""nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel,"" (4). All of these statements and claims that the author make support his/her claim that the exploration of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it entails as they are quite literally explaining to their readers why exploration is as important as it is. This tactic has the ability to make audiences aware of the importance of such a mission, and hopefully persuade them to agree. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb27ada367f8,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"Additionally, the author supports his/her claim by revealing how a mission to Venus can be carried out in a safe, mannerly way. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef71033f539d,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"This, in turn, aids in convincing readers that might have originally disgareed with the author due to the fact that Venus' ""conditions are fare more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine assustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals,"" (3). The author, after making this counterclaim, refutes it by talking of some solutions to this ever-looming issue: ""NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions of the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape,"" (5). The author talks of how the air pressure, temperature and radiation would all be survivable for humans. Some, such as the air pressure 30 miles above Venus, would be almost identical to Earth at sea level. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41bc80cfcd55,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"The author also disscusses other potential solutions, such as possibly using silicon carbide, a material that has ""been tested in a chmaber simulating the chaos of Venus' surface and [has] lasted for three weeks in such conditions,"" (7). These all are possible ways to make a trip to Venus much safer and, more importantly, they all help support the author's claim. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fae9aa1dc391,CC6CFE6D8CA8,"Overall, the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" makes a claim that although Venus has some exceptionally dangerous conditions, it is a planet worth exploring. They support this claim very well by explaining the importance of going to Venus, and providing a few solutions that might reduce the risk factor of this type of mission. All in all, this author, much like Audrey Hepburn, proves through this article that they feel that nothing is truly impossible, not even a trip to Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+215009a5bac6,CC82A1D80D1A,"Have you ever wondered what your life would be like if you did not have to drive as much. Maybe you didn't have a car at all. A small experimental suburb in Germany is tooling with the idea of a no car life style, along with many cities in the United States where a car is not a neccesity. Paris however has banned car usage all together, becuase of the amount of smog produced becuase of the automobiles. This could marke the end of car culture across many countries, exspecially the United States. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a3a4dac484be,CC82A1D80D1A,"There are many advantages to not owning or using a car, some of them may just cause you to get ride of your car. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+584df611db49,CC82A1D80D1A,"A small suburb in Germany on the France and Swiss border have given up on their cars. ""Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in the experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg."" The streets of this small town are car free. The twon offers a tram that runs through the downtown, and a few small streets on one edge of the community. The town cannot bain cars altogether, but if you own a car the only place to store it is in large garages at the edge of the town. One space can cost $40,000, the cost of the space comes with the home. Only 70 percent of the population in Freiburg owns a car and 57 percent sold there vehicle before moving. Germany isn't the only country with this type of movement. The United States is promoting ""car reduced"" communities. This will cause increase demand of public transport to the suburbs surrounding big cities such as Chicago and New York.
+
+Paris, however, is the first city to prohibit driving altogether. ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial drribing ban to clear the air of the global city. Drivers where asked to leave their cars at home or risk a fine of 22 -euro ($31). Almost 4,000 drivers where fined. Diesel fuel was blamed becuase France has a tax policy which promotes diesel fuel. Almost 70% of drives have diesel vehicles. Delivery companies complained of lost revenue, but exceptions where made for hybrids and electric vehicles. The public transit was free of charge during the bane.
+
+""President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emission, unveiled last week."" American now is has fewer car sales, people driving less, and there are fewer and fewer liscences each year. Americas love of motor vehicles seems to be subsiding. People are driving about as much as they did in 1995 which is 9% lower then the peak in 2005. Some people may blame the lack of cars and driving on the reccession. On the other hand people were buying less cars two to three years befor the reccession even hit. If this pattern presists sociologist believe it will be eneficial for cabon emissions and the enviorment. This is becuase transpertation is the 2nd leading cause of carbon emission. This could have negitive effects on the automotive companies but they are already rebranding themselves as mobiltiy companies. This allows them to have a broder range of personal vehicles. Cities like New York have established a bike sharing program. This allows people access to bikes accross the city instead of taking a taxi. Many of the young people accross the country have not even bothered to get driver's liscenses. Driving decreased by 23% between years 2001 and 2009. They instead plan activites where they can walk or ride a bike. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+449515628341,CC82A1D80D1A,"The age of the car may be coming to an end. Communities have started promoting a car free life style. Made othe ways of transportation avaliable. The younger people in the community have quit driving all together. Wether becuase it is good for the enviorment or a choice they had to make becuase of the city they live in. Transpotation is evolving into a public affair, not a personal one. The automotive industry may take a hit but in the long run this could be beneficial for our planet. There will always be car buffs, but sooner rather then later, you may not own a car altogether. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5043cb6711ef,CCF447CCADB3,"Imagine this: Rolling around in a field with your great friends, some you don't know, but some you want to meet. Having fun, laughing, enjoying life. Some people don't get to enjoy that experience. Some students don't want to push themselves for something they want to strive for. I think that it is important that students give extracurricular activities a try. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9ec9464aee0a,CCF447CCADB3,"People can meet new people, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4151f90fc07e,CCF447CCADB3,students could have a really fun time ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b7009b532d2f,CCF447CCADB3,it can be a great way to find a new activity that you are really good at and like. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d3d349aca421,CCF447CCADB3,Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ad142e813d38,CCF447CCADB3,"Bill Smith from the Virginia Board of Education implies, ""Lots of children don't love school, so I believe that if there is anyway to make it a little more exciting and have fun activities, then kids would like it better."" I think that is a good point, lots of kids and including me don't love school so it would be cool if we had to do an activity because maybe that is something students would look forward to after a long day of school. Being in an extracurricular activity can be a great opportunity to have fun and not worry about school, which I think is important. That does depend on what activity you are doing. You want to be doing one that you love, because if you werent then it would not be a happy experience. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0b1e1bb0443,CCF447CCADB3,"Sally Sue, secretary of the Bayview High Middle School say that, ""Finding out who you are and your strengths is a very important thing for this world and who you want to become."" That is a very good thought, I think that who you are is an important thing for you to figure out. Even from just doing a silly extracurricular activity you can find out what you are good at and what you can accomplish for life up ahead. I know a friend who is doing a yearbook and photography club, and maybe that is her way of finding out if she wants to do photography when she is older or not. It is a great way to find out if you want to do it in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ffc9ae5adc9,CCF447CCADB3,"One thing PROPER_NAME from SCHOOL_NAME suggest, ""Lot of kids are in different programs here, but not a lot of the kids know each other. We purposely put kids in different groups to learn about each other."" That is a cool idea. I feel that at our school not everybody knows each other, having those actives, I believe could solve that. For example, I was in this club at my school and I had no friends in it and I didn't really like it because of that. Then I started talking to people and I started to become really good friends with some people that I am still friends with to this day. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f78128a11a0,CCF447CCADB3,"Some people believe that students may be to busy for these activities. Editor Jerry Ram from the Michigan Company says that ""Students and teachers are busy a lot of the times, kids have homework and other things going on in their lives."" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ab2181f56cd6,CCF447CCADB3,"On the other hand, the activity does not have to be very long nor everyday and it could even be during school at the end of the day. For example, Timmy Lung from the Board of Supervisors argues ""When people thing about activities they think after school, but that is not the case. Activities can be during any time of the school day."" I agree with that, when we do Clubs at BRMS we do them at the end of the day. That way kids can go home and go and do homework and have time for their other sport. I know that if we had extracurricular activities after school then it would be hard for me because I have other sports to do and lots of homework on top of that. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ddf30fb0f2e3,CCF447CCADB3,"students should all try at least one extracurricular activity. Doing this, It can give kids a try on what they may want to do when they grow up and for the future, it also could be a very fun and exciting experience for the students, and lastly students could meet and talk to new students that they don't typically talk to. For this to happen you need to take action so you should go and write a letter to your principle saying and expressing what you think. Also if you are already doing an extracurricular activity then speak up to people you don't really talk to and be open minded to anyone. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5aad35c19f7b,CD0A8E34A5C0,it is important that we talk about the advantages of limiting car usage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+94f1a8bb5b70,CD0A8E34A5C0,"In the first story it says "" there have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking ..."" it also says that "" passenger cars are respondible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe ... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States."" David Goldberg said, an official of Transportation for America, a fast-growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the U.S....who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars, "" all of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change"". 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86a8b0bedd9f,CD0A8E34A5C0,"In the story ""
+
+Paris bans driving due to smog""
+
+talks about how after days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. It says that on Mondays motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day, I think that this should happen all around the world, so the world can be a better palce to live in. Here is a fact form the stroy, "" Paris typically has more smog then other European capitals . . . [Last] week Paris had a 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8acc87784521,CD0A8E34A5C0,"The 3rd stroy was about how in Bogota, Comlombia they do a car-free day, now that should be done here in the U.S.. It says that millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during car-free day, that the streets of the captial city eerily devoid of traffic jams, and that the rain has not stopped people from participating.
+
+The last stroy talks about how the car culture is coming to an end, but i really hope not and i think not. It is here ,in the U.S., the birthpalce of the Model T, a classic car that i love and i would hope so that a lot of more people do too; the home of Detroit, what i know is that they make cars up there; tha place where Wilson Pickett immortalized ""Mustang Sally"", I do not know what that is but it does sound important. It also says that "" driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009..."" I mean the highest it went was 2009, we are in 2014, almost 2015, im a young person and i love to drive i think and feel like i can go as fast as light. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a9ea5502c1a3,CD0A8E34A5C0,"What all four storys are saying is that cars will be gone sooner or later, i hope later, but the cars is what we need to go places. The car will enither be gone or be impovred some how, the fliying car maybe, but in till that happens, because i live in now, the car is what we have, i know that it's bad for the air, so instead of not using the car we can make it better, better for the world.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4aeccd497bf8,CD4B9F6B311B,The author presents the idea of exploring Venus well ,Position,Adequate,,,
+604f4ae12039,CD4B9F6B311B,"But what about walking on the surface to explore from the space craft? If we could walk on the planet without being harmed by all of the outside forces, then we coulf run more tests. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a077b3cddac,CD4B9F6B311B,"In the passage, the author states,""Each mission to Venus was unmanned because none of the spacecrafts have survived landing."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c142eb6349f1,CD4B9F6B311B,"These factors show that with the materials we have, we should be going for a safer planet like the moon or mars. The author also states that the planet atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide with highly corrosive clouds. This shows that most metals we have can be melted by the clouds and the temperature at the surface is too much for a human to handle. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e13227d253d,CD4B9F6B311B,"Like I said in the intro, If we had the materials to keep a human safe to walk on the planet and take samples. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+43851760e7be,CD4B9F6B311B,"We would have plenty of things to test here on Earth. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature in the solar system. If we could find a way to keep the hot air out and the cool air in, we could do it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5a8a84a3e1a9,CD4B9F6B311B,"In conclusion, scientists should not be looking into trying to land on Venus. There are too many risk factors to take and we don't have the resources. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f94ba18cddee,CD7714C1464D,It's illegal to drive with a phone and its multiple why you can't drive without a phone ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+aa21de42d387,CD7714C1464D,A cell phone is a one second distraction taking your eyes off the road increases the risk of crashing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+085eb874781b,CD7714C1464D,"You can say it's like driving while intoxicated. It puts innocent lives at risk. It put your life at risk. It is comparable to, if not worse than driving under the influence. You are setting a bad example for your children. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14373f4a71c1,CD7714C1464D,Drivers should not have cell phones ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3daf83612b82,CD7714C1464D,the accidents rate over the past years has been high people be on their phone so much and get distracted when you get a message ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab13f0f1283f,CD7714C1464D,I'm pretty sure you more focused on the message more than the rode. You see some interesting like on facebook or any other website you'll get so interested and forget you're driving that's how much a phone can get your attention. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+038f59840985,CD7714C1464D,I can honestly say it a cause for people to lose their life because I've been involved. My grandmother was talking on the phone it was a self-hand just to end and answer the phone that lil second caused an accident she hit someone from the back don't never think you have the sense to avoid an accident well you don't.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+647da4e73a92,CD9B8F75E2EE,During the 1700's the world did not have transportation like we do now. They had to ride on horses and walk to where they needed to go. Now all we depend on is driving where we need to go. Its hurting our world and the people around who are around it. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ebcbeedd6ea9,CD9B8F75E2EE,Their are plenty of advantages of limiting car usage around the world. Many people think its no good side to not driving around everywhere but their are ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f91113c570df,CD9B8F75E2EE,Stores are becoming closer to walking distance ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0e2fad367885,CD9B8F75E2EE,It stops cars from poluting the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b2b00d81840,CD9B8F75E2EE,it lessons stress from the human body. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+516fcab17217,CD9B8F75E2EE,"Everywhere you look you see a store or a building. We drive to places because we think its to far a walk or its a bad day to walk. In the Article ""In German Suburb,Life Goes On Without Cars""  it says that in Vauban,Germany they built stores that were a good walking distance on a main street instead on a long far away highway. So that means the stores are closer to you,which is good because you can go alot more often if they are closer and easy to get to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19fe54fc9b28,CD9B8F75E2EE,its faster to walk if they bring the stores closer to you. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a9f044524727,CD9B8F75E2EE,Cars are polluting our world everyday and everynight night somebody wants to drive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+629a8f745ace,CD9B8F75E2EE,"In the aritcle ""paris bans driving due to fog"" it says that Paris had to force people to leave their cars at home or they would have to pay a fine if they drive it. It says that it was intense smog. Cars cause alot of damage to the world but people who drive dont see how it's effecting the world. The Smog caused alot of traffic to happen and that most likely caused car accidents to happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d2e5fa56ebc,CD9B8F75E2EE,if you walk it helps you not worry about gas prices or anything that you worry about that is related to driving so it relieves stress. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b67d4dde2ea,CD9B8F75E2EE,All in all limiting car driving is the way to go. It improves the walking distance to and from the stores. It helps the world from being polluted and relieves stress from your body. Why would'nt you want that for yourself and your family. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6cb298afb6e0,CDBECBAD7FCE,"The article is obviously talking about the Making of Monalisa Face. It talks too about the Facial Action Coding System. It´s a program or system that knows if you are sad, mad, happy, etc. The guys who are helping now are Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe. The creator of Facial Action Coding System is Dr. Paul Eckman. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ea1d00df70f4,CDBECBAD7FCE,The FACS can know if your sad. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+96e13c3a2475,CDBECBAD7FCE,I need to say it is very cool. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4e4f64a97f3b,CDBECBAD7FCE,"Thats how far technology is going. A computer can know your emotions. Dr. Eckman has classified six basics emotions, happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Its all about the movement of the muscles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b06e4b122cf,CDBECBAD7FCE,"In conclusion its not an important thing to have in this world but is kind of nice been able to see if the person in the pictur was happy or sad etc. Dr. Eckman is a really samrt men, Prof. Thomas and Prof. Nicu too. So if you want to know if your friend is sad take a picture of him. Do the process and show it to him Im sure he will be surprise ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3ce0f55090ae,CDBECBAD7FCE,"I really think this is a good idea, we can know if the presidents or old history people were happy or sad.             ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+677f9195c4c3,CE0CDCBDFD26,"Luke was at his part time job when his friend Don came in and said (do you want to come on a cattle boat trip with me.) Luke knew it was a opportunity of a life time and couldn't say no. Luke was 18 before he arived in Greece which meant he could be drafted for military service.
+
+When the draft board learned he was on a cattle baot trip they said that he was able to keep going on the cattle boat trip. The cattle boat trip was an unbeleivable opportunity for a small towns boy like hime.
+
+Luke helped out on his aunt Katie's farm whch prepared him for hard work but not for the dangers at sea. Luke also found a way to have fun on board even on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.
+
+When Luke got home he was very grateful that he was able to go on the trip. To the cowboys it was an adventure but to Luke it was a opportunity to open up a whole new world. And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host of intternational students and exchange visitors for many years. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+280ab989a453,CE120A8B4336,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depsite the dangers it presents. The author uses strong details to support this claim throughout the article. Facts and statistics by NASA and other reliable sources are used to back the claims. The author stands by the opinion that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+748cf9819a04,CE120A8B4336,The author claims that the idea of inhabiting Venus is worthy due to its similarity to Earth. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b0a56e15eaf8,CE120A8B4336,"Paragraph 4 states, ""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth"" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). If Venus could've supported human life long ago, it is likely the planet still can. The scientific facts throughout this statement support the author's claim by having a reliable source of information, supporting the idea. Paragraph 4 reads, ""Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters"" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). Venus already has Earth-like landscapes and other similar formations. This supports the author's idea of exploring Venus because it is so similar to Earth, the chances of survival are higher than any other planet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4bcf29b380ef,CE120A8B4336,"Although Venus is analogous to Earth, there are slight differences of the two planets. Earth has average low and high temperatures, while the temperatures of Venus are more extreme. Paragraph 5 reads, ""At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiaton would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans"" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+049f5361485b,CE120A8B4336,"As stated, the conditions would not be easy for humans, but survivable at the least. This supports the author's claim because this proves human life could be achieveable overall. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+10c069900a18,CE120A8B4336,"This means there is a worthy reason to explore Venus; to discover another habitable planet. Along with successful life on Venus, our modern technology could also survive the planet. Paragraph 5 states, ""Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground codnitions by staying up and out of their way"" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). Moreover, if airplanes are already in existence, new aircrafts would need to be slightly adjusted to suit the conditions of Venus. The author's claim is supported in this quote because this is another reason Venus is worth exploring. The technology needed is already almost perfect for the planet, therefore not a problem NASA would have to approach. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c99766f837f6,CE120A8B4336,"Some issues still remain for the exploration, however NASA has already started preparing solutions. The heated state of the planet may be an issue, but NASA is studying a resolution. Paragraph 7 reads, ""For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions"" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). This new technology created could lead to a long-lasting basis for human life, yet another reason exploring Venus is a brilliant idea. Modern technology is too fragile for the harsh heat of the planet, but with some older computers, that as well could survive on Venus. Paragraph 7 reads, ""The thought of (mechanical) computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions"" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). This is yet another piece of technology on Earth and prepared for Venus ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d9798518e60c,CE120A8B4336,"The author's claim is supported in this statement because it is a simple solution to technology on Venus. There are very few rebuttals that overcome the postive effects of pursuing Venus. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+f6392126063f,CE120A8B4336,"With all the easy fixes, solutions and prep planned for Venus, the author's claim is overwhelmingly supported. The author proved Venus is certainly a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Position,Effective,,,
+e80359af0245,CE120A8B4336,"The positive outcomes outweigh the negatives in almost every aspect of this idea. There are multiple reasons presented in ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" that prove attempting to explore Venus has a more successful outlook than not. Throughout the article, the facts and claims highly support the author's claim of Venus being a worthy planet to pursue. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+edb45ede62d7,CE3C25E291B2,"""Its a good thing for computers to be able to tell human emotion?"" Well Dr. Huang thinks it is a good idea. Now I dont know if it is just me but with all the robots taking over the world thing in movies but ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+66df2b90a6d0,CE3C25E291B2,i dont think it is such a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+108eb99430a5,CE3C25E291B2,"Dr. Huang has came up with a computer that can read human emotion's.
+
+Now Dr. Huang's computer syestem can tell six human emotion's and let me tell u somthing human's only have six emotion's those emotions are (happiness, surprised, angery, disgusted, fear, and sadness). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d5583516efe6,CE3C25E291B2,the computer can recognize the subtle facial movments we human's have to express hoe we feel. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8d3c073f2234,CE3C25E291B2,Computers use this thing called CALCUATE EMOTION'S it those are your thinking part of your emotions like as simpole as solving a math problem and doing your work or thinking ahead. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3821d98a421f,CE3C25E291B2,so how i feel about this hole thong is that is a bad idea and that we should not have even come up with it but that is just me. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66527f3e0b6b,CE94B3F26D2F,"Summer has finally arrived! No more waking up at the crack of dawn and doing three hours of homework each night. Cheers, to where the fun really begins! That is, until your parents get the email from your teachers explaining the project you have to do this summer. For most of my life, I thought the projects that were given to us during our summer break, was outrageous and too time consuming. Looking back at things now, if it wasnt for those summer projects then I wouldnt have been as prepared as I have been to proceed onto the next grade level. Students tried to protest against not having summer projects at all, but that idea was shut down fast. Instead, the board of education agreed to hold a national vote on whether or not the summer projects should be student based or teacher based. If the projects are teacher based students wouldnt slack in order to get the project done they will actually complete it and teachers are trying to prepare you, they know the material best and are trying to provide materials they know you will need in order to be successful this coming year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3052305b59e3,CE94B3F26D2F,in order to continue learning throughout the summer teachers should create the summer project rather than it being student designed. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6bb81bc69318,CE94B3F26D2F,students would take it more serious than if they were the ones who could choose what the project was based on. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+22d4130beb53,CE94B3F26D2F,"For example, If the eleventh grade teacher gives all of her students a sheet of paper with a list of more than fifty books that the students are able to choose from, to help prepare them for next year, students know they have to read it and do all the work that comes along with it. But, if the students were able to design the project they could do, they would most likely choose the route that requires little to no effort to have to be put into it. They would choose the book that they have read over one hundred times in the third grade in which they have memorized every comic strip that was said in the book. Making sure that what is given to the students is actually going to help them in the long run and prepare them, shows the students that you truly care about their success in education. If students could design the project, they would do something the last week of summer that is, in which, super fast and easy and turn it in to the teacher the first day of school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+54eb1de875ef,CE94B3F26D2F,"to insure students are expanding their learning throughout the summer, teachers should be the ones to design the summer projects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f77356338801,CE94B3F26D2F,"They are the teachers and have gone through elementary, middle and high school just as most people have. But, they have also gone to college in order to be a teacher. They have learned specific material in which they need to know to become a teacher, regardless of the school. They have already have gone through their studies and have mastered the material. As students you are just now learning things as you grow and develop. To better understand, teachers go to school much longer than student to make sure that they know what they are doing and that they are able to teach the material to all different kinds of students. They know what we need to know and want to help prepare us for the new year abroad. Now if the students were to choose the project then they could possibly choose a subject in which is completely wrong and not needed for the following year to help you learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0d4bb9c4a4ca,CE94B3F26D2F,"summer is the only time off school, besides the weekends, where students actually get a break from everything. They no longer have to worry about grades or the big test coming up, its just days full of warmth and relaxation. Summer time is the time of year when no student should have to be doing any sort of school work at all. All students go to school for nine months out of the year, which leaves the three months to do absolutely nothing ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86e0c80fc26e,CE94B3F26D2F,Although all students dislike the summer work that the teachers push on them ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+81768e0dae95,CE94B3F26D2F,they dont understand how beneficial it is for them. Keeping your brain fresh with new knowledge everyday is what is needed in order to retain the information. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+97396d5f2753,CE94B3F26D2F,"Teachers dont assign the summer work to be evil toward you, they do it because they want you to be successful in the new school year. They want to set you up for success not failure. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+788e4aa17557,CE94B3F26D2F,"In order to be successful and retain all the information needed to help you prosper as a student in the near future, teachers should be the ones designing the summer projects. Teachers are helpful in many ways and ensure that they wants to best for you. They do all they can in their power in order for you to be successful. With projects that are teacher designed, students wouldnt slack to do the project, they would actually take time to do it and do it the right way and also the teachers are trying to prepare you for success, they know the material best and are trying to provide materials that they know you will need in the following year.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+254affa469aa,CE9EB0366069,"Summer! Often described as a time to sit back and relax, a summer vacation can be seen as the antithesis to any opportunity for learning. However, summer projects allow for learning to continue throughout the year. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bc1379fd1574,CE9EB0366069,"Summer projects should be student driven, due to the fact that they allow for self-motivation and individualism, as long as teachers are able to monitor the progress and quality of the work being done. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a19e2066774c,CE9EB0366069,A teacher-designed summer project does not allow for the same amount of individualism that could stem from a project designed by a student. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+798c1b09ceb9,CE9EB0366069,"Giving specific requirements for a summer project for an entire class of students will produce a number of cookie-cutter responses with no variety from student to student. This is because forcing students to fit into a mold limits any possible chance of self-expression. The entire point of creativity is to be outside of the norm, but that is impossible with a teacher-designed project, because 'the norm' is exactly what it is designed for. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+42487f9cb460,CE9EB0366069,"in a standard educational setting, students are not able to pick and choose what interests them, and this can lead to a lack of motivation during the normal school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a36e342a0917,CE9EB0366069,"Finding a subject that one is passionate about is integral to continuing the joy of learning and of new discoveries that is so often lost in the later years of formal education. This is not an issue for student-designed summer projects. Allowing students to pick what interests them for a summer project would solve this issue. With no parameters set by teachers, the educational possibilities are endless for a student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4cf13194052e,CE9EB0366069,"regardless of how much a student is willing to learn on their own during summer vacation with a student-based project, teachers still have their place in this system. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d1c15b9bff8,CE9EB0366069,"Checks and balances are necessary for any system like this to function, and summer projects are no different. Some parameters for these summer projects should be set by teachers. Otherwise, there is no way to ensure that actual learning is taking place during what is supposed to be a learning experience. Teachers also need to have the ability to grade any given project, which would be difficult to do objectively if no parameters were given to the projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ff78ef23b16e,CE9EB0366069,"Learning does not stop at the end of high school, and it certainly does not stop at the end of a school year. Student-designed projects allow for creativity and individualism from each and every student, and allowing teachers to have a guiding-but not controlling-hand in the projects can lead to fantastic academic results.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fc6ffac9d1e9,CEBC3C34962E,The use of this technology to read students' emotional expressions is a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+78e8da12d17e,CEBC3C34962E,"I think this is a good idea because say a student was having a bad day at school, the computer can tell if you are having a bad day and so the teacher wouldnt ask any questions, try to make you stand infront of the class reading a book or doing a math problem on the board. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a016f85aaea,CEBC3C34962E,This technology will help both the student and the teacher have a better and more understanding relationship. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cac845084035,CEBC3C34962E,"This article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile."" shows many examples or evidence that support my claim like; "" The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,"" observes Dr. Huang, ""even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression"" (like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements--in a real face or in the paited face of the Mona Lisa. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+233f2018a127,CEBC3C34962E,"Another example supporting my claim is "" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" Dr. Huang predicts. "" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+17e600ee7e50,CEBC3C34962E,"This is a great and fun way to use technology, it will help teachers modify their lessons to fit not only the schools need of teaching but the students way of learning. The students will no longer be confused about an assignment instead, they will be able to learn and grow better than if they was in a regular classroom. This is why I think we should have Facial Action Coding System in our classrooms. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0019f2383380,CF1345B5E224,on the earth cars or any motored vechle are generally accepted due to how long we have had them in our society. Cars are creating green house gases that are polluting the earth. in the France cars have been banned and have lead to geat things ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b0638fc0596d,CF1345B5E224,Making suburbs much more compact then they are right now will lead to less car usage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5c0875900516,CF1345B5E224,"""All of our development since World war 2 has been centered on car,and that will have to change"" said David goldberg, an official of transportation for America. but nothing has gotten better since all this years. pollution of greenhouse gases in the uk are up to 12 percent and in the united states an estimate of atleast 50 percent in most car intensive areas. Mr. goldberg also stated ""how much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid"" which is also something that is not taken into account.
+
+In paris there had a offical ban from drving your cars, people who were caught driving cars were fined up to 22-euro($31).Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emisssions. Caris typically has more smog than other european capitals with paris having up to 147 micro grams of particulate matter (pm) per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in london, reuters found. Congestion was down 60% after just five-days of intensifying smog which even rivaled places such beijing and china.
+
+Suburbs and cities are very wide leading to one of the main reasons for motored-vechile. But there have been efforts in the last two decades to make cities denser which have lead to greatly less car usasge. Places like vauban,home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile. Vauban having made its suburbs compact and public transportantion has lead to it being a very well success. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5b84877fb4d,CF1345B5E224,People do not understand what effects cars are having on the world but hopefully them will before this issues go even farther. With cars creating greenhouse gases that are destroying the atmosphere in large sections of are planet. But places such as paris have been finally trying to make a differences and put a partial ban on cars. and one of the best ways could be to make cities and suburbs more compact. Hopefully now you have taken something away from this.         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a6811c482ce,CF882151082B,"Do you like extracurricular activity? If you dont know what that is some examples are sports,newspaper,and student council. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5e867114c69c,CF882151082B,"I believe that students should choose at least one extracurricular activity,because it will make students more social,and they get to see what they like doing. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c13b7b2b2e95,CF882151082B,How will extracurricular activities make students more social? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+981060bf1d97,CF882151082B,"Since,most clubs make it so you have to talk to some one you will eventually talk to another student. Also you might find some one who is interested in the same things as you and make a friend. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f38ba5e719d,CF882151082B,Being in a extracurricular activity could help find what you like doing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+03b576c82378,CF882151082B,"For instance,you could find that playing football is your thing. With all the different activities there is no way you will not find the thing you like. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+225c2aaf1699,CF882151082B,"Hopefully I convinced you to be on my side. However, if your still not convinced that is fine. In conclusion,extracurricular activity help students be social and find what they enjoy. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3d96f68b3ef2,CF8F8964A2FB,I am not against the vaule of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0529a2072198,CF8F8964A2FB,I am not against it because it is cool and something different. Also the fact knowing a computer can read your emotions is kinda cool. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+141c71e85838,CF8F8964A2FB,"""if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a065bf523ea8,CF8F8964A2FB,I think that they should not change their current screen to a different screen ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bae1f9b706d9,CF8F8964A2FB,I say it should not because maybe that person is bored or confused. But you never know if that person is doing something they have to be looking at or working on. For example say i am playing a game. But i have to do a review over the game fro a project. That probably would make me frustrated because the computer think im bored or confused and have an ad appear. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fae199336341,CF8F8964A2FB,"Again, I am not agaist the idea of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. ""A clasroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" It is acually cool to know that a computer know how you feel. Once again i do not feel like a computer should change the screen just because they see you not happy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a1d849007991,CF9FB3659686,I disagree with the idea of making each student take an extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2fb0b099a0f4,CF9FB3659686,adding an extra activity to a students life will just make it even more stressful ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b3d0e82e46e,CF9FB3659686,"already have to deal with fake friends, sometimes parent trouble and depression due to all the work they already give at the school. Some students might also not have a parent to pick them up or drive them to the extra activity after school so those students might not take an extra curricular activity because they dont have a ride with then that would be unfair to the students that do. Student might also not find the time or have the time to focus on an extra curricular activity because they have enough going on outside the school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba64210421aa,CF9FB3659686,They might also be lazy and not show up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd7c551e4061,CF9FB3659686,because they find zero interest in the extra curricular activity even if they dont have anything else to do. Some extra curricular activity you have to pay money to enter but some students dint have the money to do that extra curricular activity Research shows that students are mostlikey to do something they enjoy to do rather than being forced into the activity and sometimes the school doesnt have the activity that the student likes so they will put no effort into the activity they are forced into. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ccafe9f0ccb,CF9FB3659686,"Of course the idea has pros but not that main one of them is that it will look good in college applications, but not as good as doing something outside of school without the principle telling you that you HAVE to take at least one extra curricular activity v. I WANT to take an extra curricular activity! ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e7343a056b9b,CFA591751173,"Do you believe in aliens? An abundance of people in America think there are others among us from other planets and galaxies. They believe this for a variety of reasons, such as UFO sightings or because of the so-called ""Face"" in Cydonia on the Red Planet Mars. Throughout the years since 1976 we have worked at NASA to discover the secrets of the face, uncovering that it is indeed just a landform with suspicious shadows. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+fa39ee9bdfed,CFA591751173,"The ""Face"" is just an ordinary landform on Mars with unusual shadowing ",Position,Adequate,,,
+754c9365ef5a,CFA591751173,"because of recent pictures taken of the natural landform, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2bc32a5c5855,CFA591751173,"scientific evidence, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1f10c9d9242c,CFA591751173,and measurements taken. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+21867f211d81,CFA591751173,"To start, NASA has taken recent picture of Cydonia in 2001 that shows it is just a natural landform that has developed on the Red Planet Mars. ""On April 8. 2001--a cloudless summer day in Cydonia--Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. ""We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degreesto center the Face in the field of view,"" said Garvin. ""Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution."" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel inv the best 1976 Viking photo."" (p. 10). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c464cdff713c,CFA591751173,"As discussed before, NASA has taken a new and better quality photo of the Face in Cydonia. Using our scientific equiopment at NASA, we have proven just how much better the resolution is on the new phototgraph taken is. """"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size,"" he added. So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the gtround or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"""" (p. 11). This quote from the article shows ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f96aee1baa99,CFA591751173,"Finally, NASA compares the Face landform with similar landforms on Earth in America. The scientist compares the Face with a landform called a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West. ""it reminds me of Middle Buttle in the Snake ZRiver Plain of Idaho,"" says Garvin. ""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" (p. 12). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c30109008a27,CFA591751173,"On the contrary, some people believe that the face is """"Bona fide"" evidence of life on Mars--evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists"" (p. 5). ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3d1c7a3fa131,CFA591751173,"In defense, NASA has scientifically proven the ""Face"" is just a natural landform created on Mars. ""What the picture really shows is the Martien equivalent of a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West."" (p.12). 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6899ce5ae34e,CFA591751173,"In conclusion, some people may think there is alien life on Mars because of past picture or conspiracy theories. No one can denty however, that NASA has proven the Face to be nothing but a natural landform on the Red Planet Mars. NASA has proven this by recent pictures, scientific evidence, and real-life examples and measurements. Over the years, NASA has worked hard to figure out the mystery of the face, and just recently they have discovered, with pictyures, evidence, and measruements, that the Face is just a natural landform with unusual shadowing formed on the Red Planet Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4a96441f4ebe,CFAFADA9A2C3,The author studys Venus is a worthy pursuit despite dangers becuse there are many things out there that could be discoverd worth thr dangers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+85d411741dcb,CFAFADA9A2C3,"In paragraph 8, it says ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally could be explored and lead up to much bigger things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1d22b0a7af0,CFAFADA9A2C3,"If we dont take the chance and explore we could be passing up many great discoverys, such as a new plant that couls help cure canser or even a animal that could help save the enviotment. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a90b9d30d34,CFAFADA9A2C3,Many people may say they dont want to risk peoples lifes or to scared of what could go wrong ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+18d18b14ad65,CFAFADA9A2C3,This is a risk that should be takes becuase if not there is a chance we could missout on a discover that could do big things. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4782a0002824,CFAFADA9A2C3,"""our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation"" is what was stated in the story saying this is a big project we dont want nor need to miss out on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce7a49a11111,CFAFADA9A2C3,moral of the stoy we need to get out there and discover new things.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+91f9ca3e3740,CFB5BFF82CDE,"When Luke was a little town boy he made a huge inprovment by becoming a
+
+Seagoing Cowboy. He saw a lot of stuff on the boat as you can tell on paragraph 5 he said, ""Besides helping people,I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China."" That would be a great experince for a small town boy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82f7539c3b4f,CFB5BFF82CDE,"it was a great idea to join the program because, you could tell your grandchildren about all the things you have seen and done. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bc6b42aa815,CFB5BFF82CDE,"If his friend had not been there to tell him about it he would have been working two jobs his whole life. Luke is probably very greatful.
+
+Luke is also the best there because he has went threw the route nine time as you see on paragraph 6. Luke point of veiw would probably tell more about what he saw during the trip and what he did. He loves ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a63773fb0258,CFB5BFF82CDE,to help people by this job he has helped bring all the cattle/food. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6dbb085874d5,CFB5BFF82CDE,Luke is very talented for having this job because you have to feed the animals about three times aday and keep them alive. You can state this information on paraghraph 6 and 7. He worked so much he got hurt and craked his ribs. He was happy to be alive. Therefore he had to stay at home to get better. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1aa834baf0ae,CFB5BFF82CDE,how fun it was to work there and he would convince you that it is a realy good job. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08e1bf1faef6,CFB5BFF82CDE,"He was very happy to get this job beause he said, "" I'm grateful for the opportunity."" Luke created history and when he could not do the job any more people visited him all the time like students and many familys to live on all the history he made. It opened up Lukes world up when he got the job. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52340a52b370,CFB5BFF82CDE,Its also so cool how they played sports when they had free time to take the time away. Its amazing how he can get all those animals and pick them up on the boat and take them across the country and drop them off. He was realy good at his job to do that! That is how Luke Bomberger made history in America. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f46d43aaede8,CFC1F5729C6D,I am with the idea of the FACS becaues it seems vary interesting. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+22eb4b4a10f9,CFC1F5729C6D,The idea of a machine that can read emotions is cool. Though can be a little scary that commputer can tell if your happy or sad. But the idea is still cool to think about. I would like to see if they can even get the FACS to work on animals in the furture. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60c61525fd84,CFC1F5729C6D,A reasion this could be a good idea is becaues you be able to tell if some one is lying to you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+282917b84cd9,CFC1F5729C6D,Like if there is a bad persion in court and you wont to know if there lying to your face you just look at the machine and it would tell you. Though some people would like to keep some things a scorit you be able to tell is there lying to you and if there sad as well then you know its a secorit. Many people would be saved and devastated by this machine. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e696d48ca50f,CFC1F5729C6D,My second reasion for going with the FACS is becaues it may be able to uncover crimes like if the dead persion was sad or happy when they die. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cde547cd7f5,CFC1F5729C6D,"Some family members may want to know that but will never know if they don't have the FACS. The FACS seem to be good on paintings so I was thinking that it may work on a dead body. Becaues if it works on Mona Lisa, then it should work on anything that dont use muscle ever or in the past like a dead body. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+97edee41eb3a,CFC1F5729C6D,My therd reasion is if you make it be useable on animals then we can uncover a lot of mysteryes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ec0fc2f969fd,CFC1F5729C6D,Like if you wanted to know how your dog or cat felt about you all you had to do was turn on the FACS and see. We could also see if lions kill becaues there mean or becaues they dont know what eals to do. Many things could be uncover thnks to FACS. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd907609b1c5,CFC1F5729C6D,Thess are my reasions for choosinf the FACS becaues it can help humans in many ways. We could be one step closer to uncovering mystoryes. I like the idea but many people may dissagree becaues they might say that they want to keep things scroit. But like I sead earlyer use the machine if there lying but also sad then you know it is a scorit. So I beleve the FACS should be able to go to anyone that wants it but that is just a thought. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12a6fe2fe338,D04FFF579D2D,"The Venus is second planet from our sun. The Venus is the hottest surface remperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. It is 800 degrees Fahrenheit.
+
+Venus is the closest planet to earth densigy. People sent numerous spacecraft to land on his cloud draped world. No spacecraft survived that land for more than a few hours.
+
+A long time ago Venus is cover with largely oceans and various froms of life just like Earth. Venus still has some feature that are analogous to those on Eart. The planet has a surface or rocky asediment and includes familar feature such as valleys, mountains, and craters. At thirty-plus miles about the surface, temperature would still be toasty at around 170 degree Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7ea45c823841,D04FFF579D2D,NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8ed26f132b67,D04FFF579D2D,"For example, like electronic made of silicon and it been tested in chamber simulation the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted for three weaks in such conditions. They have another project to look back an old technology call mechanical computers. This devices make calculation by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick but tend to be more delicate when it come to exterme physical conditions. By comaprison, systems that use mecanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f3cfaa689efc,D0733E25A2C7,students don't want to stay after school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10b77e20bede,D0733E25A2C7,other students could have other events to attend to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ddf9713786a1,D0733E25A2C7,that can get in the way of students education ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa1cb5e616f1,D0733E25A2C7,If schools are already making it stressful for students think about how it might impact on their mental health and grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4eda1cea75dd,D0733E25A2C7,"fewer students might not have interest about the programs that the schools are suggesting, this could also get in the way of spending time with your family, and that could increase major mental health issues to the students in the future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+488c59f93429,D0733E25A2C7,"if schools are forcing students to do something that they don't want to do, that could develop a students safety and they might not want to go to school anymore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd5cc423f664,D0733E25A2C7,"Maybe staying after school could help increase students self-confidence, make new friends, or increase their mental health. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3c2527faf898,D0733E25A2C7,"It's always best to give students options, and letting them enjoy what they do best at, but it's not right to force them into doing what they don't want to do; yes I agree that after school activities should be in school, and open to all students.
+
+Don't force students into something they don't feel comfortable with, but recommend it to them so they can think about it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b96718655d20,D0733E25A2C7,"Everyone should get the chance to stay after school just once, and if they don't like it they don't have to continue staying in an after school program. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1372c6e83313,D0859D4FA7A8,"Being known as Earth's twin, Venus is a planet most people are famliar with. Having rocky surfaces, sediments and mountains, this planet was most likely very close to earth long ago. The author states that the surface temperature reaches 800 degrees, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+37a4fb4b93a2,D0859D4FA7A8,"Then the idea is brought up, what if we lived on Venus? Exploration of this planet has begun, and with profound dangers, scientists are still pursuing the idea. Venus is a planet that has tough conditions, but still may be suitibale for life. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+78e36f90570d,D0859D4FA7A8,"Venus poses some very intense conditions, such an environment is something humans could never survive. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd2c3e4e99ca,D0859D4FA7A8,"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing futher visits to it's surface? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86829389bd85,D0859D4FA7A8,"The author states that scientist noticed Venus was close in characteristics to Earth's. Large oceans probably covered in oceans and could've even supported living organisms. ""Venus is the closest planet in terms of density and size ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21e671a32aba,D0859D4FA7A8,"Because of Earth's simularities to Venus, Scientists see this as an oppourtunity for collecting data and planetary visits. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d761cfe6313e,D0859D4FA7A8,"The upfront dangers of planetary visits are extreme, not to mention going to a planet with the heat to liquify metal ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+067047d6d6c2,D0859D4FA7A8,"Despite these challenges the author states we cannot let dangers get in the way of us exploring. ""Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endeavours."" Our exploration should not keep us from collecting data and finding things about our Earth and Solar System. The author explains, we need to meet the very edge of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1fe2af0fcfcf,D0859D4FA7A8,"Venus has many dangers, seeming to make it impossible for humans or any life to survive. Despite all this, scientist continue to strive for planet exploration. Venus is a planet that has tough conditions, but still may be suitibale for life.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+032238023c02,D0B6CE1FA38E,Studying venus is a amazing purduit because no human could not live in venus or go up to venus because its far away from earth and we haven't made a spaceship that could reach all the way up in venus because it could never make it ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+fc4f80c1c877,D0B6CE1FA38E,"Another stuff you can be finding for venus is the clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus. And on the planet;s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure in 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.
+
+These facts that you can research are very true because you could go up there and find out all theses stuff and these facts support my claim because you can research cool stuff about Venus and that other people didn't know about and thats how it supports my claim. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df264f8678bf,D0B6CE1FA38E,And thisw concludes all the stuff in my essay if Venus is a worthy pursuit to study about Yes i think it is because you could be learning more than others about Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac388684df86,D0C6EB30D833,Did you know every summer students are assigned to summer reading? Students are required to read at least one book or more in order to stay engaged in learning. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+2114a0615f35,D0C6EB30D833,Summer projets should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a667d42094c,D0C6EB30D833,"you get extra help, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fb3d6d5c3947,D0C6EB30D833,"you worry less, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bdbaf3b247aa,D0C6EB30D833,you create a stronger bond with the teacher. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c1c27234b778,D0C6EB30D833,"By getting extra help, you able to work on your mistakes and fix them. In this case, you are free to get assistence from you teacher regarding any concept you do not understand and he or she will be more than welcome to help you. For example, incase you are working on an assignment that is math related and there happens to be a question you have worked on several times but still can not figure out, you will then find the need to explain your weaknesses to your teacher so that they work on a solution for your concerns and questions about that specific problem you are trying to solve. As a matter of fact, if you happen to be struggling with any particular subject having teacher-designed projects is more helpful and significant hence you are attaining help and directions from a professional person who understands what they are doinig as well as what you need help on a much higher level that outstand that of a student-designed one. That being said, a teacher-designed summer project is a perfect way to continue learning because you are not only being assisted by getting extra help on a specific assignment, but you are getting more knowledge and benefiting your education even when you are not in school. In other words, you are learning from your mistakes by fixing them with the right tools you need through your teacher and that results in you being more confident and comfortable on that very topic or project you had issues with in the first place. Indeed, getting extra help from you teacher will help you get better grades and following a well teacher-designed summer project will put you in good position for working hard and working on your communication skills as well as keeping your brain sharp and training it to endure any complex situations such as making sure you complete any due work and homework on time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f9c05ac66f2a,D0C6EB30D833,"Because students are on vocations, this is their time to get caught up on their favorite hobbies and fun activities with their friends and one last thing they would want to think about is doing some sort of homework during their free relaxing time with family and friends moreover on a summer morning. For instance, lets say a student wants to hang out with friends on a saturday evening, but they remember they have a whole packet of work that was assigned to them before summer vocation and that by the end of summer before school starts, they have to finish it. The student will most liekly be worried and concerned about getting it over with and that means they will either cancell hanging out with friends and stay home doing random summer assigned homework on a saturday, but this is not the case when you know you are working with you teacher and that they will be able to walk you through all the work. Students surely worry less when they are working with a teacher on summer projects hence them doing something fun and relaxing in their free time sinc their teacher is available at any given point. School related projects or assignments are more easier to handle when your teacher is always there to work with you on that specific assigned assignment. As a result, students are much likely to enjoy their time away from school without anything bothering them for whatsoever case. Since students have already endured and served their time on the previous school year, they do not need any kind of aspect worrying them to the point where they have to stay home rather than them having fun and enjoying themselves and having a good time on a summer beach day while having fresh air and cooling off. Therefore, summer projects should be teacher-designed since students are not getting overwhelmed with what they need complete, but rather having some fun time with their friends and telling jokes and laughing them off with their relatives and maybe their pets who knows. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a6400eeb7be,D0C6EB30D833,"By doing so, teachers and students are most likely to get along with each other with no issues of any kind. Teachers are more than people who went to school and got their degree, but they are also regualr people just like everyone esle and at a certain point they become like family to us. So it is important for students to make sure they are in good terms with their teacher just in case they need help or guidance from the teachers, they will not get it if they behaved wrongly or cursed at their teachers which is something we often see in schools today. Well, if students and teacher manage to keep a steady and firm bond between one another, no obstacle or problem will come between their relationship, meaning they will be able to work with each other on a daily basis with no problematic concerns from either side. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ae1a3d240fee,D0C6EB30D833,teacher-designed projects are best ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4241622695f7,D0D8097D243C,"Some schools partake in making their students create summer projects to influence them to learn over break, and to ensure that any and all learning from the previous year wasn't completely lost. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bdbaaced9da6,D0D8097D243C,Summer time projects should definitely be assigned but with the students engagement. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+848c9d509ba6,D0D8097D243C,"To some, school brings more bad than good, but with proper summer time review and practice it could get better for the student, if they had the steering wheel for a change. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e062d85218b6,D0D8097D243C,allowing the students to design assignments could persuade students to engage more in school if they made their own rules and regulation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a6b21d81aed,D0D8097D243C,"In addition, if teachers continue to design the majority of the students summer time projects, consequently, the project assigned will be either completed to its minimum rather to its maximum, and not to mention the overall quality would definitely be dramatically decreased ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d050f2fddeae,D0D8097D243C,"students want more independence on the student designed assignment, rather than becoming more dependent on the teachers design. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+907a632891f9,D0D8097D243C,"Furthermore, students may do sports over the summer, enjoy vacation with family, have enrollments in other schooling, or may even have an occupation ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1705702f4cac,D0D8097D243C,"regardless of what the scenario is, if the reins were loosened a bit to let the student design the summer time project, chances are it may make the student happier, and eager to do more summer time projects before the next school year begins. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e4c84769be70,D0D8097D243C,Over time the student creating his or her own assignment will lead to stronger and improved memory development for the many school years to come. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+568bf628b305,D0D8097D243C,"Designing an over the summer assignment could possibly may be fun to the student. With proper curriculum over the summer, it will definitely help the students who really need it most. Maybe for extra credit, better classes to take for the next year, or just as a brain exercise, Its still always healthy to keep the mind of a student functioning at all times. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f42352d1a7b,D0D8097D243C,"letting students design their own summertime projects to their convenience, could change the relationship between students and teachers for the good and in the long run. Allowing them to let their minds run loose, be filled with creativity, and to be excited for the next assignment could potentially allow for better communication within students and teachers. Summer time is mainly filled with joy, and with a little tweaking, so could schooling! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7574953e1e76,D0DAA0A3A4EA,I will be talking to you about how scientist's are thinking of putting things on the planet Venus and i wll also talk to you the fasinated thing our planet Venus has to offer. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+19164e04e08c,D0DAA0A3A4EA,"Well Venus is sometimes called a Evening Star. It's so bright that young stargazer would be able to find it. Venus is very hard to get a good look at, it's the second planet from the sun. It's name can be misleading, and the planet is refrred to earth as our "" twin"" plaents. We haven't been able to send a spacecraft over there yet because of the fact that the stuff we send over there are not able to survive for less than an hour. Scientist's have onle been able to send robots and teven they can't find a safe landing sight.
+
+The clouds on Venus very corrosive since they have sulfruic acid in them. The air is also 97 percent carbon dioxide. The planet also has the hostest surface, it's tempurature can reach 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric preasure is also 90 times greater than Earth's, but despite the planets dangers it would be a worthy pursuite. For example the planets atmospheric preasure is so strong that it crush a submarine that can go into the deepest part of the ocean.
+
+Scientist's are fascinated by the planets Earth-like apperence. They think that long ago there use be a form of life that could have been very much Earth-like. The main reasonfor why astronomer's are so fascinated by Venus is because it looks very much like Earth. For example it has valleies, river bank's, and even mountains. Scientist's are thinking of sending a blimp like aircraft that can fly or hover at least 30 if not higher miles the planet's surface. The tempurature would range around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The best part would be that there is plenty is solar power. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e45fb8a94582,D12165A1A427,In this article the Author talks about the dangers of the planet Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2076cb10d5a5,D12165A1A427,like its high ground temperatures of 800 degrees Fahrenheit or it's atmospheric pressure being stronger than even the deepest parts of our ocean and brings up the failed mission from the past. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf28d8d36f12,D12165A1A427,"
+The Author talks about how the scientist have come up with a new old idea of using a computer made of gears and levers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8734d84c3bc6,D12165A1A427,which won't be as technologiclly advanced as our current ones but will be able to survive harsher conditions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a253943af2bc,D12165A1A427,The facts that are brought up about the planet and it's conditions and a way to get there are great well put together to the point where its makes you think this could be a possibility for us in the near future. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6fae4cc93561,D12165A1A427,"Overall with the facts about the planets and information that was brought up by the different ideas of the scientist that were listed in an organized fashion, I think this was a great essay. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+29a974fbed04,D150C1CD72D5,Cars have been around for many years and generations. People rely on cars for transportation ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+43de9d7f3459,D150C1CD72D5,theres places where car usage is being limited ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1eac070dc852,D150C1CD72D5,the pollution it causes to the environment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49eb370072dd,D150C1CD72D5,"help create a better environment for the people. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c5bd03eef67,D150C1CD72D5,one reason car usage is being limited is because of how much pollution it brings to the environment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5182da2d18c2,D150C1CD72D5,"According to article 2 paragraph 17, Paris usually has the most smog than any other European capital. The smog cleared enough for the French party to remove the ban of odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. This means cars have been a great cause of the smog in the city. In Bogota Colombia, thers a car-free day in act. According to article 3 paragraph 21, the goal of the day was to promote other transportation and to reduce smog. This shows that people aren't considerate when it comes to the environment and don't realize the pollution they're causing. Therefore limiting car usage is beneficial. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3cbdf9d877b5,D150C1CD72D5,Another advantage to limiting car usage is that it can help create a healthier environment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+246e190fbc63,D150C1CD72D5,"According to article 2, people would participate in Day Without Cars regardless of weather. ""The rain hasn't stopped people from participating."" explained Bogota Mayor Antanas. The campaign brought constructs of 118 miles of bicycle paths. Parks and sport centers also grew. This demostrates that people are determine to make the environment they live in into a better place to live. Aritcle 4 states that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses each year. This shows America is probably leaving driving for better alternatives for the environment and their lives. And limitation to car usage was a big key to this behaviour change. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24058860b542,D150C1CD72D5,"Although driving has been abused for years, places are beginning to limit the usage of cars. Some of the reasons cars are being ban are due to the pollution is causes and it helps create a better environment for the city and people lives. Would limitations of car usage ever completely get rid of cars as a transportation.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4b938f873700,D169E2520168,The face on Mars cannot be created by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c3b1d8d784c2,D169E2520168,if the NASA cameras did not see any people/aliens. On that fact if NASA did see any aliens on Mars they would have kept it top secret and wold have not showed the images to the world ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f311776136d3,D169E2520168,"Not saying its true but if NASA had shown an alien on Mars the world would freak out and we wold destroy each other.
+
+Now tell me if you seen an alien on Mars what would you do? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79667cbc1685,D169E2520168,All I am saying is in 1976 if aliens did make that face then why are we still here? Why haven't the aliens came yet ? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+94de45087d3e,D169E2520168,Because if aliens were to make that face on Mars then that means they seen NASA's cameras circling their planet so they would've found a way to get them down. But I think it's a big pain in the butt to the people that think thier is alien life on a planet in our Solier System ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a07a94d8ab9c,D169E2520168,I also want to no part in this discussing because if you don't want to belive me that is on you to look crazy if front of the world so do what you think is best about it I have to get to back to work. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1a88965ab1c9,D18B9F0D2CB4,"They come in red, blue, green, black, and white. They beep and honk while they ride on highways and transport people form place to place. Cars are everywear. What would the world be like if we didnt have cars? What are the benefits of life without cars? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a9e8a2ee8568,D18B9F0D2CB4,"Life with out cars benefits the environment, and peoples' health. ",Position,Effective,,,
+dd8d1e4fc540,D18B9F0D2CB4,the elimination of cars helps the environment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae501da9734d,D18B9F0D2CB4,"""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States"" (5). In other words, cars are higly responsible for the harmful gases that pollute our atmosphere and cause global warming. In Paris,  a partial driving ban was issued to clear the air after days of high air pollution rates. After the driving ban, ""congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France after five-days of intensifying smog"" (14). By using cars less, citizens can reduce pollution and help keep our earth clean and safe. Statisticts show that fewer people  are using cars around the world. ""A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009"" (41). Sociologists belive that this trend will continue and possibly increase. They belive it will ""have benficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions"" (34). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a61b38d2c09e,D18B9F0D2CB4,it will benefit the health of citizens both mentally and physically. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fb7763596923,D18B9F0D2CB4,"In the German suburb of  Vauban, citizens have given up their cars. A resident there says ""when i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"" (3). Limiting car use also limits the frequency of trafic jams, accidents, and unfriendly drivers in a hurry along with the stress and frustration that accompany them. In Colombia's capital, Bogata, the Day Without Cars has had many participants. One of whom said ""It's a good opportunity to take away stress"" referring to the event. (24) limiting stress can have major benefits to a persons health and mental well-being. limiting the use of cars does'nt just positivly effect mental health, it can positivly influence physical health. In Bogata, Colombia, the car-free day inspired residents to ""hike, bike, skate, or take buses to work "" (20). Excersize releases endorphins which are chemicals in the brain related to pleasure. Many people that excersize regularly are happier then when they don't. By limiting car usage,citizens are more inspired to excersize making them happier and healthier. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+702581d3cd50,D18B9F0D2CB4,"a life without cars means a healthy, long-lasting planet along with a happy, relaxed, and healthy population. Even though cars are conveint, they have many negative side effects. Next time you want to go for a ride, think of all the benefits of limiting them. Rember what a breath of fresh air feels like because the gasses from cars might mean they will be gone soon. Get used to angry faces honking horns, and being given ""the bird"" by angry drivers because with cars come many conveiniences, but also many frustations.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+950e0fded92f,D1AF5CE5040E,"When students leave out of the school building doors for their summer break, I can promise you that the last thing they are thinking about doing is more work for their teachers. In different scenarios, It would be very convenient and unique for kids to continue their learning while enjoying their summer at the same time. They would go to school the next year and only need very little, if any, reminders of what they should've been learned the previous year. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2b00fd1218ca,D1AF5CE5040E,student-designed summer projects would be an awesome addition to student learning over the summer. ,Position,Effective,,,
+c10336696c0f,D1AF5CE5040E,"Many students either get left behind a grade, have to do summer school, drop out, or just barely pass and end up going into summer not knowing any of the material their teacher has tried to teach them. Things they should've previously been learning would seem new to them. As a student I will admit that some of the material is quite confusing at times. If you pay attention, study, and do your class/homework , it gets way easier. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70f2a81dda15,D1AF5CE5040E,Projects are designed to help teachers grade the student on how well they know material or a subject. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a997ebd3543b,D1AF5CE5040E,"Projects help the teacher get a better understanding of what the child may need help with in order to get better at the subject and/or to pass their upcoming Standards Of Learning test.
+
+There is a boy at my school that we are going to call Generic_Name. Generic_Name does not understand the WWI subjets in his history class. He's been doing his class and homework, been paying attention, he's been writing his notes, but he still does not understand the subject. He's asked his teacher for extra help and has recieved it. While his knowledge for the unit is growing, he still just barely passes his Standards of Learning test with a 401. Over the summer, his school required all students to make up their own project about anything they may have learned. At first he did not think it was going to help him but he decides to give it a try anyway. Generic_Name decides that if he has to learn about something over summer, he might as well learn about something he's been having trouble with. He completes his project with just a month left of summer and now has a better understanding of the war for his next year of highschool. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ff78540f549a,D1AF5CE5040E,"In order to help kids better undertsand things, not only should we do projects at the end of every quarter during school, we should do them during summer too. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+410abedae1c5,D1AF5CE5040E,Students will get smarter and teachers would be much happier when their whole class can raise their hand and answer questions about the new material they are going over. Students should be able to do the project on anything they have learned from any class over the past year. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+997523fdf7eb,D1AF5CE5040E,"To ensure we would have less drop-outs, students who have failed for the year, or kids who simply do not understand the material, public schools should take part in making the project a requiremnt that students must complete a summer learning project of their desire, as long as it is something they know little about. The project is expected to be taken serious as an SOL would. It is a great way to make sure that students would not forget any knowledge over their summer. Also, it would be a great excercise for thier brains as well as it would get them ready for college if they plan on furthering their eduction. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+421500591fce,D1B06A3C02B3,Assigned schoolwork during summer break has been a widely debated matter for years. For both supporters and opposers of schoolwork being assigned during summer break begs a crucial question: Should summer projects be student-designed or teacher-designed? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1a1952f314ae,D1B06A3C02B3,"Although assumptions may lead many to state that teachers, who hold the experience, should deisgn these projects, it is more beneficial for students to design the projects themselves. ",Position,Effective,,,
+8764cd933c70,D1B06A3C02B3,"There are many misconceptions regarding the mentality and intuition of students; it is very likely that student-designed projects can prepare them for large programs and/or assignments, such as the Personal Project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3fe0d3dea6cd,D1B06A3C02B3,"In addition, it may also relieve teachers of excess work. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+9106b9d41a5d,D1B06A3C02B3,"An increasingly common assumption is that pscyhological intuition, and creativity in some aspects, increases with age, thus students are less capable of designing a project, or most things for that matter, than adults. Several people argue that students may lack maturity, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+79e32ef3483e,D1B06A3C02B3,"but various pscyhologists, notably Generic_Name, have disproved the claim, finding no evidence of maturity being linked to one's intuition or strive of creativity. In fact, this myth actually arose due to various reforms of the Progressive Era restricting children and immigrants' personal freedom, which continues to this day. Although many would deem this irrelevant, it is precisely the reason that we must not hold back to provide students with freedom in creating their own projects and avoid persisting a key issue. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+462fdfd2e86c,D1B06A3C02B3,"Adding to that, and perhaps one of the most common arguments against teacher-designed projects, is the statement that students are not exposed to projects that require overarching critical thinking ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9a962533f45a,D1B06A3C02B3,"Research conducted by various universities, such as the University of Chicago, has shown that students are not prepared for upcoming projects every time they complete a teacher-designed project; ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+3cd7aaa174e7,D1B06A3C02B3,"for example, a student completing a project that provides them with a template, deadline, and requirements may not actually affect them to the extent that many people assume, as the student simply searches for information rather than being properly invested and analyzing the information they have, as they would be much more likely of doing in a student-designed project. This is not simple speculation; counties in New York and Massachusetts, even with their massive demographic, cultural, and ideological differences, have both reported increased success in student-led projects after beginning their student-designed summer projects curriculum. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f78575e09bf4,D1B06A3C02B3,"Despite the aforementioned standpoints, there is no doubt that teachers are very important figures in society, and they should never be taken for granted and must be treated with absolute respect. Unfortunately, a large domestic issue in the United States is the amount of appeal of having a teacher career. Unlike in countries such as South Korea, American citizens stereotype teaching with negative assumptions/statements. Although that is another discussion in itself, it still has a strong tie to teachers being overworked, in some regions more than others, but it should not be downplayed nontheless ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a441e125f35a,D1B06A3C02B3,"In many states. summer break is one of the only periods of time that teachers can be truly relieved of work, and that time should be maximized by reducing their tasks; if there is going to be schoolwork done during the summer, it is at the very least a moral ideal to relieve teachers of doing unnecessary work that could be easily handed to students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8d8ba429bcd9,D1B06A3C02B3,"Simply put, very few communities should expect to carry out teacher-designed summer projects with pleasing results. As promising as it may seem, it is apparent that teachers should not be given excess loads of responsibility of their students, and it is time to allow the students to take their own approaches to their tasks and prepare them for what is to come. It is not a perfect idea, as no idea can be, but everyone must take steps to reach their end, even if it is gradual. If we are to see to the success of more students and further cememt the well-being of our educators, this is a crucial step that should be taken.          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+69e943bf18ac,D1C16D61C365,To be in a Seagoing Cowboys program would be awesome to be apart of. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d41d80a93454,D1C16D61C365,"Being apart of this program you could see cool things,see different cultures,and just think about what an opportunity this could be ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae51f3945ed4,D1C16D61C365,"You could have so much fun being apart of this journey.
+
+I think being apart of this program would be a awesome opportunity because not alot of people could do this and be apart of a program. You also get to see really cool things like antique artifacts,really old buildings,and diffrent lifestyles. This would be so much fun because you can learn how other people live their lifes in different countries,and explore places you never thought you would even go to. You could also see different cultures and try their kind of food they eat every day,and see how people in different countries go about their everyday lifes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a0ff0ce52764,D1C16D61C365,I think this could be a life changing oppotunity for people. This is a awesome thing to do because it is not an everyday thing for most people to be apart of. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef68eb68f464,D1E865DE0A88,Luke' point of view of convincing others to participate in seagoings cowboys program . ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7991d5525aa0,D1E865DE0A88,"The text states , Luke was 18 before going to grece and when the draft board learned he was on a cattle boat trip , they told him to just keep doing his service . The text also states , it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of china to the united states and a month to get to china . The text also states , caring for the animals during the crossing kept Luke busy , they had to feed and watered water the animals two or three times a day . Luke says helping on with his aunt katie's farm as a boy had prepaired him for hard work ,but not for the dangers at sea . on his second trip , Luke served as night watchman . his job was to check on all the animals every hour . Luke said on one rainy night , after making his hourly eport to the captain , he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside , and his heart started pounding . Luke also found a way to have fun on board, especially on return when the animals have been unloaded . At the end Luke said being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure , it made Luke's world open up for him . This proves that Luke's point of view convincing people to go to the seagoing cowboys program . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66de6bb2bb65,D20BEF9C2CD7,"many of peolpe own and drive cars, everyday. For some people having a car is very impotant to their lifestyle. when buying a car peopl tell you that having aa car is great , but do they tell you the other effects it can have on your physically. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dbce361916aa,D20BEF9C2CD7,having a car not only affects your daily life but allso affects your environment. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+83886c9fe11c,D20BEF9C2CD7,"have you ever heard of the greenhouse affect, global warming and air pollution? the abundant usage of cars have a large affect on those vital things in our environment . ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f6080671efb9,D20BEF9C2CD7,"In cities like paris , because of the air pollution caused by cars, there is very dense smog ( source2 ). Air pollution is very important because the toxins in burnig fuel can be harmful to the healthof citizens. smog is not only a problem in paris , but all over the world . places like paris and Bogato have created things like car day , to discourage th e use of cars, because of that the air polluston on these places have reduced dramatically .(source 2 and 3). due to the efforts to reduce car usage , the smog and othe pollutions clearded up uthe air which showed that not using your car for one day can be tramindasly helpful to your environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3b40a4298b7,D20BEF9C2CD7,"In the United states the automoblie industry is huge, and having a car is one of the things that many citizens hold dear to their daily life. recently things have started to chang in the U.S .  government is starting to realize the affects of having millons of cars in our country is gaving on our environment(source 4 ). since the expansion od suburbs th                       ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4442c3c987d0,D228AB564BF6,"The dreaded summer assignment, boring students by holding them hostage inside and not letting them enjoy their time to be free. All the stress of the school year washes away when students leave the building in June, but then students are reintroduced to that stress with projects and extensive work that may not be of interest. The more likely the students are uninterested in the work, the more likely they are to not turn it in, so why not make summer assignments what the students want while introducing the course they are set to take. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+896147cde32c,D228AB564BF6,Summer assignments should be student-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+311605d1aa75,D228AB564BF6,students can take interest in their study ,Claim,Effective,,,
+53be97ed0edf,D228AB564BF6,"make learning fun. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c5d9c5ac1ce8,D228AB564BF6,"
+Nobody in the world wants to wash summer away with book work from the class they don't like. Projects like research papers, essays, and 20+ page packets can drown students for the months they have off. Summer before sophomore year, for my history class we had 2 20+ page packets to ""introduce us to the course"", when in reality, it was just a few hours a day for weeks of busy work of finding answers in textbooks. Painful summer projects, like my class's history packets, will put a bad taste in the students' mouth before they even step foot on school grounds for the year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b08f3224bbd0,D228AB564BF6,"Summer assignments have to be short, sweet, and efficient, or they will lose the student, potentially for the entire school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+68486a867774,D228AB564BF6,"Students should be able to pick a topic for a standard project, like a short PowerPoint or a poster presentation, where students can go hands on while learning. Those history packets would be much more involving to me if they had to do with the World Wars or Military history, and even more if they involved some sort of project component. Disinterest also causes students to be less likely to complete summer assignments. I know of plenty of students, that just won't turn in the project or assignment if they don't want to do it. Summer of Junior year, my class had an essay to write about a current political issue. Half of the class turned in that assignment on time because they just didn't want to do it or were plainly uninterested. Summer Assignments need to be like those A+ introductions to essays, they need to grab the reader and hook them into the topic early, or in the case of summer assignments, they need to interest the student so they keep going and are hooked for the year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fafe5140739b,D228AB564BF6,"The only downside to student designed projects is the way of grading and assessing their work. The more freedom students are given within a project, the further projects are going to be from what a rubric wants, which can be a pain for teachers ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+be78af731a33,D228AB564BF6,"If you tell students to come up with an experiment and make a presentation on a tri-fold board, you could have one kid coming in with a project about wildlife and one with a project about aerodynamics for a chemistry class, two experiments no where near being on topic. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d8bc5ebfd41,D228AB564BF6,"There is a limit to the freedom teachers should give students, but there should be extensive freedom to the students within guidelines. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1040398f997b,D228AB564BF6,"The only way for a project students like to be made, you have to consult the students. Politicians in democratic governments don't guess what the voters want, they ask what the voters want. If teachers are trying to build something for the students, ask the students, it's simple. If teachers want more interest in a course, better grades, more students willing to work, more participants in class, or better summer projects, the only way to do so is to let the students design the assignment. Students designing the project will make learning fun. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+302cb274d6b8,D25C3B9925E3,"Summer projects are not always fun to do but to make them fun they should be student-designed. Teacher-designed projects for the summer are really boring and most people dread doing projects in the summer. Although teacher-designed projects are less creative, student-designed projects are more creative. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5c1d24f5df6e,D25C3B9925E3,Students should design projects for the summer ,Position,Adequate,,,
+463bfebe2ac3,D25C3B9925E3,"the projects will be more creative, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+79c61d5392eb,D25C3B9925E3,"they will be fun to do in the summer, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12c6271e28ae,D25C3B9925E3,"the students will be more interested in doing the projects. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+7da553674c50,D25C3B9925E3,"if a teacher were to hand out a project, there would be certain things that you would have to follow in order to get a good grade on it. If it were a student-designed project it would have follow a guide line to make sure it is on topic. Another example, every year in elementary school teachers would give a checklist for how many books you read. Students don't want to do that at all but if teachers told the to keep track of what they did through out the summer that might be fun. Students should design the projects because students are more creative than adults and can come up with projects that are fun for them. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5015626122d3,D25C3B9925E3,Students should design the projects because they can come up with fun idea's for a project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7bc6f2710c47,D25C3B9925E3,"instead of reading a certain amount of books for a grade, they can set a challenge goal like trying to see who could swim the fastest in a certain amount of time, they can record how much tropical foods they have eaten. Another example, when summer starts students can keep record of how many miles they walked or ran. Students can keep track of how many miles they traveled in the summer and at the beginning of the school year they can see who traveled the most and Whoever had the most can get a special prize. Students should design the projects because the students would have a lot more fun doing the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1899c3ede504,D25C3B9925E3,"if teachers were to design the projects students wouldn't want to really do them. The students would want to do something they're interested in, not an assignment from the teacher for the summer. Another example, Students are interested in what they're doing because they want to. When teachers make the projects they want you to get a good grade but they really don't care if you are enjoying it. Students should design the projects because while they are getting a good grade on them, they are also interested in what they are doing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f66294fdb555,D25C3B9925E3,"Students should design the projects because they can enjoy doing the project, they can have fun while doing the project, and also they can be really creative when they need to do a project they're interested in.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+052caf85798f,D28927CB06B9,"Is the ""Face On Mars"" real? Was the pictures mistaken to come out as something else? The photo from 1976 was a big deal because,of what they seen. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+240a8d4c20b5,D28927CB06B9,I think the photo is just a plain platform they has been formed into something it was not. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d5ed26eb9e90,D28927CB06B9,"I have heard a lot of stories about the ""Unmasking Face on Mars"" and they are quite interesting. I was with this scientists who said he saw the forming shape of an alien Martian and has believed it well. He said that , "" I saw a huge rock type of formation that was forming into a human head"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a57cb9906be8,D28927CB06B9,"The rock might have looked like a forming figure,but it was just a natural land that appeared to look like a alien type figure. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f509fbaf4c4,D28927CB06B9,"In 2001, the pictures that was taking on the planet showed nothing ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+25e2dc66ffa2,D28927CB06B9,"Later on in reseach,we discovered that the research on the Martian figures sought out to be fake. I described everything we found on the photos that was taking. ""I have seen those photos and they are not true. The basic studies say they were a consparicy and were hidden because they were not sought to be real shot photos of the forming figures. "" If you look closely at the phots took in 2001 one you shall she the photo shows nothing but land and a ight platform of the planet"" I said to show a better undersatding of ehat the photo shows. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bab6624488ce,D28927CB06B9,"Those photos show and just make the picutre seem like it is forming real life aliens, but that is just how the photo was shot ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+281a59da16b6,D28927CB06B9,"Continuosly, NASA has changed the way they shot the photos. The photo that was taking before was not taking carefully. The others that was taking was by a more advanced shot. Then it was stated to be no alien monument at all. It was just a natural platform of the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6d421cc4616,D28927CB06B9,This was just a basic statement to show how the alien photos shot by Viking was just not like it was in 2001. Were the phots true? Did the Face On Mars really affect the live of what lives outside of us? Well we know that it really was a natural platform. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+15efdf1b3e91,D2A667825CB4,I think the author supports the idea well ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bcba4d90f522,D2A667825CB4,"because i would think it would be dangerous going to see venus , but that is just on what i read in this passasge. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a63b395602b9,D2A667825CB4,Some evidence that i saw in this passage of how Venus would be dangerous is that 97% of venus is covered in carbon dioxcide and it ca melt a submarine that goes in our deepest oceans. Also every other spacecraft that landed on Venus only survied a couple of hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50c1403c6a5e,D2A667825CB4,My conclusion is that as much as us humans try to get up and personal with Venus it will never happend because of how dangerous it is. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5e4868bb3689,D2A667825CB4,An explantion of the evidence is that Venus is to risky for astroughnaughts to study it. Really the only I say this that Venuses surface is the hottest out of all the planets. Venuses surface tempature averages 800 degress Fahrenheit. Alson the atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we are used to here on Earth.                       ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8af4055dbcb,D2F5E24CEEAA,"Summer break is typically a period of time where you can take a break from school and work and be relieved from all sorts of stress. But some schools assign students to complete summer projects to provide them continuous learning over the three month period time of being absent from school. The projects can either be teacher-designed or student-designed, which one should be assigned to the students? although both sides can be debatable student-designed projects might be less difficult ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d488d87d6f05,D2F5E24CEEAA,it should be student based because the project would still complete its targeted goal and still help students have continuous learning over break. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e719e16e9a1d,D2F5E24CEEAA,"Summer time is the time when most of us are outside making plans, meeting family, going around the world, and even just relaxing without any problems from the world. Summer break was made to help our brains take a time off of work, school, and stress. But even when we are on a break there is always something we need to do or can do that will help us have that continuous brain activity so when we are back from break we did not lose all of our knowledge and working habits and can hop right back into learning and working. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+66536ec84fcb,D2F5E24CEEAA,the work can be kept to a minimum and still have us have that constant brain flow and typically teachers dont understand that for students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+004095db60ce,D2F5E24CEEAA,"When assigning work to students over break, teachers normally would base the work and projects on how much time we have. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7eba2fe329e3,D2F5E24CEEAA,"If all the work would all be teacher-designed, they would see it like; the longer the break would be the more difficult and longer the assignments or projects should be. That would not be too fair for the students that deserve the break after having 9 months of constant learning and hard work in school. Also If the projects were to be teacher-designed it would not be fair to even the parents that are on break too because they have to stay at home and wait for their child to finish the work before starting their summer vacation or their family activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d98bf445aac3,D2F5E24CEEAA,"The purpose of the work over breaks is understandable, to ensure that we do not lose our knowledge and keep our brain working so when we go back to work it would be easier to get into learning and working as soon as possible. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dcfe16bf1f6a,D2F5E24CEEAA,"But the work can also be easier but can target he same objectives, this can be obtained if it were a student-designed project. Students know their limits and the targets for the projects so students can personally complete their own tasks and get the work done at their own pace. It would be way less stressful if students didnt have to base how much work they get done how they do the work by another persons standards that does not know what other things the student has to do in his or her life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c5b7fcb18b52,D2F5E24CEEAA,All in all summer is a period of time to be stress free but it can also affect our learning and working habits. But we still do need something to challenge our brain to keep those habits and students should be able to control how they do that. The work and their projects over break should be student-designed and not teacher-designed because we can keep the work to a minimum based on our schedule while still targeting the same objectives the teachers would want us to accomplish and both the students and teachers would both get what they want. The students get their break with minimum work and the teachers still get to know our brains are getting challenged. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+50e092ea17aa,D2FB5374A7A2,Since the planet Venus is the closest planet to earth's density and size scientist have been trying to explore the posibilites Venus could have. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40ac8d779d2b,D2FB5374A7A2,"Venus is the second planet from the sun which means it is very hot. Venus is 800 degrees fahrenheit and is 90 times hotter than what we experience of earth. Humans have sent many spacecrafts to Venus, but none have sucessfully made it, the ones that have landed didnt make it longer than a few hours. A spacecraft hasnt touched Venus in more than 3 decades. Venus has an atmoshere of 97 percent carbon dioxcide.
+
+Scientists want to explore venus because since it is the closest planet it earth maybe at one time it had life. Venus likely had a great amountof ocean water and could of had many lifeforms. Venus would be our closest option if we visited a planet. Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. A blimp like vehicle hoverig 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape would be a good option. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f0bc4c4f35d,D30AC446FAC6,"Summer is what what every student look forwards to once they're in school, everyone who has been a student knows this. Summer projects can be fun and it's a great way to help students from forgetting the information they learned in school. Having fun and getting some freedom is what makes summer so special to so many students all over the world. Completing assignments is what school is all about, some can be fun and some are confusing and downright boring. Students do not get to make many decisions with their schoolwork. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1f0b68293110,D30AC446FAC6,The idea that projects that are assigned over the summer should be student-designed is valid ,Position,Effective,,,
+af68d1bdc767,D30AC446FAC6,students would get a chance to be creative while also being able to express themselves through schoolwork ,Claim,Effective,,,
+883c0a99cbd7,D30AC446FAC6,"make their own decisions like an adult, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d45410be998f,D30AC446FAC6,"summer is when students get free time so they should decide what they want to spend their time on. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5e0dc5c7d1aa,D30AC446FAC6,"When students are assigned projects and other forms of school work, they never decide what they want the assignment to be. Students aren't allowed to express themselves much at school; expressing themselves can help a lot of students to figure out what type of person they are. Some times students feel confused and do not know what to do in what has been assigned to them. But when students design their projects they will have more fun and will increase how proud students are about what they have come up with. Designing can be a strong point for certain students and they do not truly know it until they get some experience; discovering your passion is what many students have trouble with nowadays ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+945f2bbb9d14,D30AC446FAC6,"Students are in school to learn, mature, and become great adults once they're older but they aren't treated as such. Making their own decisions can help them become extraordinary up-front adults. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4faf20a0affb,D30AC446FAC6,"Even today many struggle in making decisions of their own; if students are taught to make choose what they want to do, they'll have less difficulty in making good choices for themselves. Sometimes adults do not know what choices to make as some do not choose wisely. Letting students make their decisions through own accord can make it easier for them when they have to make important choices in their life as their brain will be programmed to think about the choice they are making. There are many skills people need to survive in the real world and decision making is one of them. Little things can have a big impact on many; it may not seem like a lot to let students design their projects but it can be a big influence on many. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+de8a1afd03f3,D30AC446FAC6,"Summer is the only free time students get in the school year, they should at least decide what projects they want to spend their free time on. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d04c4143564,D30AC446FAC6,"Summer is when students can: travel, spend time with their family, have fun and go out. But, if they have to work on projects and they're boring, summer can become dreadful as some assignments are bland and boring. Very few projects are actually fun and entertain students to help them want to keep learning. Free time is valuable to so many students, as it is the time they get to distress and not worry. But if they design the project they want to focus their time on, it can make retaining the information they learned in school fun; possibly making students to want to learn more and even look forward to these summer projects. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+68cd1aaf5f9b,D30AC446FAC6,Some may argue that students would not take the projects seriously or that students could do something inappropriate in these projects. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1080cf55054a,D30AC446FAC6,"Some students may be too immature and just give up on these projects, teachers are the ones who are going to grade these projects. So, teachers should decide what they want to grade as it'll be more organized and specified. Also some may say that students are still to young to know what they are doing and may end up doing something that they did not think twice about. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f432005542d,D30AC446FAC6,"Summer is fun and special to so many students who currently go to school. School work is dreadful to many, but designing projects does not sound too bad. Designing projects can be fun and a new experience for many. New ways to learn instead of the old traditional boring way can be interesting. Giving students a little freedom would not hurt. Students should be able to decide what they want to do with these projects as it is a great chance for students to discover many new things. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fb65455a852d,D34487073C35,In all four sources they have advantages of limiting car usage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+28fc5a4a21ae,D34487073C35,"in Source 3 ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"" by Andrew Selsky it says ""Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving he streets of this captial city eerily devoid of traffic jams. This example shows how they limit car usage in Colombia. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57b73f9e9047,D34487073C35,"""When I had a car I was always tense."" Im much happier this way"" said Heidrum Walter."" as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor."" This quote from the article shows how walking turned out pretty good for her instead of driving all the time.(Source 1) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+184e3804e4c3,D34487073C35,"In source 4 Elisabeth states that ""New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorites, as do a profliferation of car-sharing programs across the nation."" This example shows how a program for bike sharing worked out great instead of using your cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+152de1b6ca75,D34487073C35,these examples from these four sources inform citizens about the advantages of limiting car usage. And there are some really good examples that inform you about limiting car usage. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b9f8748acfa9,D34DFB9BF717,"In the education system, students are always required to be learning, advocating, and being better prepared for the future. But what happens when students go on summer break? Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning over the break. Some argue that the projects should be teacher designed, while others argue that it should be student designed. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1fc45a5a30b0,D34DFB9BF717,The projects should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+66840b9d676b,D34DFB9BF717,students wont be as motivated if they themselves didn't design it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+66f53b9bcc1a,D34DFB9BF717,it is their break time from school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19b688309367,D34DFB9BF717,They should be student designed since they will be more motivated to complete the project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+493a657bd62c,D34DFB9BF717,"When giving the students a teacher designed project they will ,most of the time, feel very unmotivated and bitter towards it. However, if the project is being designed by the students, it will allow for the students to learn more from the project and result with more excitement, motivation, and better work ethic. Not only will the students get more joy out of doing a project they designed, but they will also be able to apply a more creative side of themselves they might have not even known they had. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bde3d4bba63d,D34DFB9BF717,"They should be student designed since that is their break from school and during their break, they can do whatever they please to do with their time. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7960abfbd0f0,D34DFB9BF717,"That time is given as a break from school since throughout all the other months, they are required to learn what they are being taught. If the project they are required to complete is student designed it wont seem like as much of a threat to them and wont be looked down upon as much. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4eadd9e31ce,D34DFB9BF717,Some people might disagree and say that it should be teacher designed since the educator knows what they should be learning and how they should be learning it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+02422d252877,D34DFB9BF717,"Although they know the material better, the students summer break is their time and when giving them an assignment, It should be their choice on how they want to complete it. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d9fd3ee99afd,D34DFB9BF717,"Giving them a student designed project will motivate them more compared to a teacher designed project which, a lot of the time, results in the students not even completing it. In conclusion, during the summer, the projects that the teachers assign should be student designed since they will be more motivated to complete it and That is the students break from school.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+205d62cd76a7,D376C98ABBDB,"Students may not always make the best decisions,but we still chose what we wanted to do whether it would affect us or not. We don't make all of the decisions, because we have parents, guardians, and sometimes teachers to help us stay on the right track. However, if a person is in a spot where they could control what we do,like a principal, than their decisions could make things a whole lot worse or better. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+462fad9c21d8,D376C98ABBDB,"If our principal forces us to do an extracurricular activity, than I would say
+
+No! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2cf050406b98,D376C98ABBDB,"We might get stuck with an activity that we've never done, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c183066a6b4,D376C98ABBDB,We might have to miss it because of other important matters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13538416996b,D376C98ABBDB,"and finally if we miss it, we would have to deal with the repercussions ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+056dfef1bad4,D376C98ABBDB,"If the principal just assigned everyone to a random extracurricular activity(lets assume that thats what happened and that we could not change it.) than the chances of people particularly knowing that activity go down by a lot. If you are not a type of kid who hates to run around, or, you have asthma and you can't run,what if he accidentally enrolls you into the soccer club. You go up and tell the instructor that you can't run and they say, thats fine, but, the principal will be somewhat mad that you can't do the program. ""I guess i'll ask him to get you a different one this time.""Or what if you get stuck with a game like cricket. It is extremely hard to learn how to play that game, and it also is super hard for newcomers. If you were stuck with something like that, than you are not going to have fun with it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+165ad31403b5,D376C98ABBDB,"Lets say that you were chosen to be on the student council and you have a meeting after school. Unfortunately you have a therapists appointment after school at the same time. Will the principal force you too stay or will he let you go like he should do. You might have soccer practice for the junior league championship game that is coming up but you have to sit in a chair and talk about the budget for the Shrek junior play instead. It just would'nt work out with all of the problems, and also the fact that all kids are different and that they should'nt be forced to stay after and miss something important because of their extracurricular activity after school. I just feel like they should let us do what we need to do after school and not bother us with after school extracurricular activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b4ea78af9d77,D376C98ABBDB,"The principal would punish those who either missed his extracurriculars or made a fuss about them. it would usually range from detention to having to eat lunch in another room. However, if you miss 3 after school curriculars than he would call your parents, 6 he would suspend you, and 10 or more he would expel you, (Permanently). He did do a good job of enforcing his rules too. He has resource officers and they will tell the principal if you have been missing out on his after school activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e891f3fc506,D376C98ABBDB,"No one should force you too do anything that is outside of your comfort zone except your parents, they can force you to do anything they need you too do. Other than your parents and family members,no one should even think about forcing you to do something because that is just a horrible thing to do. unless they have permission from your parents, I don't think that they should be able to tell you that you can or can't do extracurricular activities because that would'nt be fair to the people who actually enjoy them. As for the rest of us, we'll be fine her as long as we don't have to do any pointless extracurricular activities. So to answer the question, would you like to have to do an extracurricular, No! not at all, but some people might ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+894f3c453412,D377F569FE8D,Scientists shouldn't travel to Venus anytime soon. Why would you say that you may ask there are a few reasons why scientist shouldn't travel to Venus. Venus isn't a safe place to travel to ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9b65532ff4b7,D377F569FE8D,"It's already a risk traveling in space, but it's an even bigger risk to travel to Venus. Here are some of the reasons why Venus isn't safe. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+af9da8a936b8,D377F569FE8D,First the unimaginable heat on Venus can make metal boil in a snap ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7aca0186bea5,D377F569FE8D,"According to the text "" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit"". The average summertime day on Earth ranges from 90 to 100 degrees Fahrenheit those are temperatures some people can barely stand. Imagine 8 times 100 degrees that sure is toasty. No human can last 1 second on Venus without protection, and without being burnt to a crisp. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ae10d01a506,D377F569FE8D,Next the atmosphere is mostly made of carbon. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+90298ce6bdc4,D377F569FE8D,"According to the text ""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus"". These are poor conditions to live under especially since humans can't live without oxygen. The carbon is also poisonous to humans as well in order to breath on this planet you'd need a huge oxygen tank. Not to mention there's also sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b7250198656,D377F569FE8D,Finally just like Earth Venus has natural disasters as well. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a2c0bf046b92,D377F569FE8D,"The text states "" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface"". Unlike Earth these conditions are amplified on Venus, and are stronger on Venus than on Earth. any evidence scientists do get from probes is electrical shock. Imagine what would happen to any ship we send with human in it ""KAPOW"" lightning strikes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+320384c9ba9b,D377F569FE8D,"It's safe to say Venus isn't human friendly. Venus isn't human friendly because of the; boiling heat, the carbon dioxide, and the intense natural disasters.
+
+Venus doesn't seem robot friendly either due to when a probe gets close it'll stike the probe with lightning. As if these are warning signs Venus clearly doesn't want any visitors anytime soon it's best to stay on Earth for now. Venus is uninhabitable for now at least you'll never know what the future may bring. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+07fcfcf23b16,D3D2660F2D77,"Using a motor vehicle as a source of transportation is part of everyday life and is not rare to the stereotypical American. But cities such as Paris, Bogota, and Vauban are all striving towards reducing the rate of motor vehicle usage in their areas. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6ac166286dce,D3D2660F2D77,Advantages of limiting car usage are lower greenhouse gas rates ,Claim,Effective,,,
+03efd36af20e,D3D2660F2D77,suburbs can become more compact and more accesible to public transportation ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fb356d8e5d20,D3D2660F2D77,"people are able to live less stressful lives. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+33d0619f3b5c,D3D2660F2D77,"Transportation is the second largest source of America's emmisions and is responsible for fifty percent of greenhouse gas emissions in the United States but is slowly making a change towards helping the enviornment and being beneficial towards carbon emissions. In 2005, the number of miles driven in the United States was at it's highest rate. As time went by, the numbers started dropping and getting lower. Many sociologits believe that if the numbers get even lower and stay at that rate, the benefits will come for the enviornment but unfortunetly not for car companys. Paris typically has more smog than any other European capital and is working towards a way to fix that. Paris banned driving due to the intensity and abundance of the smog in their city and had people use public transportation free of charge for about a week. Not using motor vehicles for those days really did help the situation of Paris and gave people an insight as to how life would be without cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+345f0ae7b39b,D3D2660F2D77,"Vauban, an upscale community in Germany, is home to suburban pioneers who have given up their cars. Seventy percent of Vauban's family do not own cars and fifty-seven percent sold a car to move there. ""Smart planning"" is a component of the movement to seperate suburban life from auto use to create a denser and more compact enviornment and let people be more accesssible to public transportation. This means less space for parking, and more stores compactly placed and at short distances. In Bogota, ""Car-free day"" is part of an improvement campaign which helps residents of the city to see how life is life without the use of cars for a day. People use public transportation and walk to their destinations with no problem. More parks and sport centers have also been added to the area as a result of less car usage, so more space for other important things. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+be4491508219,D3D2660F2D77,"Dropping off your kid at daycare, then driving to work, then having to drive your child to soccer practice can be a constant and stressful cycle for most parents. Residents of suburbs that have low car usage rates claim that they are less stressful. In a suburban community with little to no motor vehicle usage, the suburb will be more compact, having more stores and buildings closer to eachother at very short distances. This makes it easier for residents to get from point A to point B quicker and more efficiently. This also allows for more walking areas with less traffic and dangerous cars to worry about. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9ed2877ba24b,D3D2660F2D77,"Cars can be useful in many ways but for the better of the enviorment, peoples cities, and sanity, little to no car use is the way to go.         ",Position,Effective,,,
+ead17955d232,D3E0089B305C,"So many people claim alot of things. people will claim that the moonlanding was fake. Wadonna wears a wig eveyrtime time you see her. elvis presely isn't dead. hitler many still be alive today. but we dont know any of these things, you see the idea that we claim things is sometimes true and can be sometimes unrealistic. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e58e3d2a77df,D3E0089B305C,"technoloy floods our brain, meaning there is so many inventions it just brainwashes us. We can use photo I.D. now for getting on to our phone. There are mixed emotions when we do show our personality, the techonolgy recognizes it. So we can change everything so someone says, ""the facial expressions for each emotion are universal,"" observes Dr. Huang. The mona lisa drawing is suppose to bring a smile to everyones face.
+
+So people are still wandering what the mona lisa represents, the mona lisa represents art and beauty. There is a song called mona lisa, and its kinda a love song, saying your my mona lisa baby. So i think the whole idea of this song is to show that the mona lisa is a thing of beauty it represnts more than just beauty.
+
+What else does it represent, well does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion? Do you feel mad or sad. if you felt sad and you were crying and you went to the mirror and looked in the mirror, what would you see in yourself because down deep inside if thing yuo incredibly hurt. Can your lab partner recgonize which emotion you are doing? yes there is a doctor for that. there are so many emotions you dint even know throughout the day. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6b4c7e45292,D3E0089B305C,in conclusion the many way we show emotions can be mixed up. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7cc9e880b92e,D3E0089B305C,"The impolsovity or maybe catatonia, these emotions are so rare they are usually not effected by people. So lets talk about the signs, alot of people would have droopy eyes mening lieing. Donald Trump and many politians lie to get what they want.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0213ea340c50,D3F5104B809F,"Is it a really a good thing to read someone emotions? well it is, if you see someone who's mad, sad, fearful, you can help them to calm down, to feel better, or to feel less scare. emotions really lets someone to show everyone how they feel. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6dff94c0a490,D3F5104B809F,But using the Facial Action Coding System (or FACS) on classroom full with students could be a good/bad idea ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+25ff46e1537f,D3F5104B809F,One teachers can see if students are confuse or lost ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc49ba05149b,D3F5104B809F,two they see if there's something wrong with one of the students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37f3c17b5b5f,D3F5104B809F,three some students don't want their's teachers to be in their's problems. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2ef057347ae,D3F5104B809F,"Before I explain more about why it's a good idea for teachers, I want to talk about how i feel about FACS. It something that i never heard about and i think it's somewhat a good idea, but i dont recommaning it to put it in a A.I. It would get a bit weird and creepy if it's in a robot, but that's how i feel about it. Back to the topic, if a teacher is given out a lesson and some students don't get it they use the FACS to see if they get it or don't. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1f2e42261f0,D3F5104B809F,"They can even use it as they teach and see what they in to work on long until they understand the lessons or topics. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a46c00199909,D3F5104B809F,You know how some teachers would ask the class how are they doing before they start the lesson? well there are some teachers who don't ask that but do care for their's students ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ebbaf1cb41e,D3F5104B809F,If they use the FACS before they start class and see someone depress or sad they can wirte their names down on a note or peice of paper and after class or school they talk to them one on one to see whats wrong or if there ok. they can even try to help them or make them feel better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9d6d2b4f751,D3F5104B809F,"There are some students who need help or need to talk with someone, but they chose not to get help because they feel like it's gonna make it worst for them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+02e63e182ebf,D3F5104B809F,"I know some people who really need some help but they dont want to get help, but we had they FACS in my school they get help faster. than again they would get mad with teachers fast becuase they don't teachers to help them with their problems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ccafac9a7be,D3F5104B809F,"Thats what's I got to say about the FACS being a classroom. It would be really helpfull for teachers, but some students would be annoy by it easily or would think that teachers are trying to be apart of there personal lives. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+498e20b55110,D40B940B5A4D,"Why would you think the Face was created by aliens? When photographers take pictures of Mars, you never see an alien in the photos. There may be research going on to find alien life, but so far, NASA hasn't found any. Therefore, it couldn't have been created by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4d0dd10a9e7e,D40B940B5A4D,Scientists have credible information that shows people it is just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e3418d78c5c8,D40B940B5A4D,"First of all, if NASA thought an alien created the Face they would already be researching it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+720e26a775fc,D40B940B5A4D,"Afterall, scientists automatically assumed that it was a Martian mesa. They are common for the area that the Face was found in. Why do research if scientists know it is only a mesa? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+985624b9c4e4,D40B940B5A4D,Conspiracy theorists often try to confuse the public by saying that NASA is trying to hide Mars. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+2ec58a233a29,D40B940B5A4D,"This is not true, and I know this because even the people from NASA say they wish there was civilization on Mars. If NASA found civilization on Mars, they would announce it because it's exciting. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+321d1837a83f,D40B940B5A4D,"No one has ever seen an alien, so if NASA released pictures they would get loads of publicity. NASA isn't going to let people lose interest in their foundation, therefore they aren't going to lie to people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45ea8346e98d,D40B940B5A4D,"Next, we have the information that tells us the Face is just a landform. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb79d5b9d29c,D40B940B5A4D,"When new pictures of the Face were revealed in 1998, the truth came out. Michael Malin took pictures of Mars that were ten times sharper than the original. The new and improved photos showed everyone that the Face, in fact, was a natural landform. There wasn't any evidence that could tell us it was an alien monument. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b8183ba7c7c,D40B940B5A4D,"Of course, people still weren't satisfied. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+67113ae84466,D40B940B5A4D,"Once again, Michael Malin goes back and takes photos in an even higher resolution. The new resolution helped capture the real size of the Face. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b7f061fb644a,D40B940B5A4D,"After extensively studying the pictures, Jim Garvin states that it ""is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa"". He goes on to say these types of landforms are common on Earth, mainly in the American West. The Face is just a regular landform. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1780e09cfc74,D40B940B5A4D,"In conclusion, that is why the Face is just a natural landform. Almost 30 years of research went by until they came to their conclusion. The Face is only a meer mesa. It was created naturally, and not by aliens. No one can argue with facts! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+930a7a1c1edc,D44639122EAF,"78% of all distracted drivers are distracted by their cell phones, cell phones play a massive part in society nowadays. Ranging from the age of 13-60+ most people around those ages has a smartphone which can put all their attention on their devices. The whole world is revolve around smartphones, kids at a young age instead of running around and playing outside like kids used to do, nowadays all they do is focus on their smart technologies, it's very rare to see a kid off their devices unless they are in school or doing homework. Teens are heavily addicted to their phones, if a teenager loses their phones they act like they lost their whole world, they get very sensitive and gets angry at everything if they lose their phones. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2399bcf5501,D44639122EAF,"Teens can't learn from the adults since the adults acts the very same or even worse than teens, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c740fc8cb5f,D44639122EAF,"smartphones to adults is their way to escape the hard real truth of the world, and it can also act as a way for teens or adults to communicate with others if they are unsociable in real life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+915ca9f297d3,D44639122EAF,"Driving is a thing most adults and 16+ teens do, they use the cars to drive to work, school, or go to a place where they can have fun. To teens driving is the first thing teens will do to start taking the responsibility of being an adult, but for some reason even though you're supposed to keep your eyes on the road teens and adults alike are on their phone texting and driving which is as bad as drinking and driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb6be2a7fbb4,D44639122EAF,Teens cant follow the adults who they look up too since the adults themselves are setting a bad example by texting and driving which give teens a sign saying it's ok to text and drive. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+81ad941bbaf9,D44639122EAF,"I've been in minor car accidents due to teens or adults on their phones not paying attention on the road, I've also seen many of my older relatives go on their phones while on the road. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bda06fc96a13,D44639122EAF,There are laws set in place already to ban texting and driving which means due to how many accidents and murders there has been due to people texting and driving on the road. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4642616e94e,D44639122EAF,"Cops can pull you over and give you a ticket just for texting and driving if they have suspicions of you being on your phone. It is not worth getting a $200 ticket for texting and driving, you should wait until you are at your destination or at least pull into a parking lot to see your texts if they are that important. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5663cf637db3,D44639122EAF,I do not support the use of texting and driving due to the high risk that involves with usage of a technology while driving ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0481ff1ee56a,D44639122EAF,phone companies such as Apple or Samsung should create an app that forcefully locks your phone while you are driving so that you cannot see the texts or send back text. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d3866cd71cf,D44639122EAF,"Overall, texting and driving is as worse or maybe even worse than drinking and driving due to everyone having a cell phone and not everyone is at the legal age to drink alcohol. Texting and driving can happen in any part of the day while drinking and driving is usually around night time due to how everyone drinks when it get dark outside. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+07e999b108e2,D45032FAE402,Is the Facial Action coding system a good idea to put it in the student classroom? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+446b299e2025,D45032FAE402,"I think not,its not a good idea to mein 2 ways. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ba6b8cb6c5d0,D45032FAE402,One is because the kids might not want you to know how they feel. My second one is becuase what if a kid gets picked to be mad or sad and he gets into a fit and he gets super ticked off becuase he didn't want anyone to know. The last one is becuase that weird to be checking for the kids emotions. The first two are both similar and the third one is just plain obvious. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d735bb23391a,D45032FAE402,"Yes it might work in classes like drama club, Happy day club or other clubs but other than that i dont think sobecuasei in just a regular classroom it would be weird as i say ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3482affc6d7,D45032FAE402,"I beleive it could also maybe work for sports but other than that i dont agree that we should have thoese emotion reader system in our classrooms. people might not want to get recognized as mad,sad,happy or even just plain or tired. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0b5d8ae87096,D45032FAE402,Another last reason why i dont beiieve it should be in the classrooms because just as i said in the other paragraph that peoplemight notlike it or might now want people to know how they feel becuase it might be personal. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8e04dd4073c,D45032FAE402,"It is personal and its crossing the line. Soem people might get into a fit and that wont look pretty. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83527c3d8990,D45032FAE402,"In conclution,i disagree that we should put the Facial Action Coding System in the classrooms because it wouldn't look good in the classrooms for students nor parents.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cbdec5a21a2c,D4BC716CE227,"What do you do after school hours? A lot of students spend their time playing sports, doing homework, studying, and also hanging out with friends. My principal has recently added a new rule saying that students must participate in at least one extracurricular activty such as school sports, working on the year book, or serving for student council ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0850526da989,D4BC716CE227,I personally dont think this is a good rule for various reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+198c45408a89,D4BC716CE227,school is enough for kids the way it is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3a94dfae4a6,D4BC716CE227,students should be able to do what they want after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5068f0fbe69,D4BC716CE227,My main reason is that students already spend 7 hours every day at school and they shouldn't have to work more after school for things that might not even benefit them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+05a88d42ed43,D4BC716CE227,I think studnets should be able to spend their time on whatever they like to do as long as they go to school alongside with it. Students should be able to decide what they want to do after school and can play sports and sign up for activitys if thats what they want to spend their time on but I dont think they should be forced. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ddb9b3b9b85c,D4BC716CE227,Another reason why i think students shouldn't be forced to do extracurricular activitys is that most students are already stressed out with homework and studying outside of school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14379549583d,D4BC716CE227,If students are already stressed out with outside activitys then why should they be forced to do another things on top of what they already have? A lot of students get stressed out over school related things and if the school makes them do more things outside of school it'll just make them more stressed. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6c20886f060,D4BC716CE227,"Lastly, a lot of students dont just spend their time doing nothing all night ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8e6cb2a89d8a,D4BC716CE227,"most students play a sport or play instrument or find something to do after school hours. And if they don't they're probably busy studying or working on homework. Students dont just sit around and do nothing all night so i think this rule is pointless because a lot of students are already busy doing things. And if some students have to do more things on top of what they already do then that will only cause more stress and might make grades drop because they don't have as much time for school things. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8efd08365ccc,D4BC716CE227,So what do you like to do after school? Does what you do take up most of your time or are you bored a lot? And most importantly do you think that students should be required to particicpate in extracurricular activitys? These are my reasons why i think we shouldn't. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e1b0a3e89dc9,D4CAF981DE04,"Have you ever wanted to know about the planet Venus? Some of you wouldnt want to study or pay attention to the planets in space. Some of you would like to pay attention to the streets or what not. It does not matter if you dont like space or planets but if you thinking about it, then now is the time to learn about the planet Venus. In the excerpt, the author explains that Venus is sometimes called the ¨Evening Star.¨ This something that you will be shocked about because I wouldve never known. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0b3f9fb7e276,D4CAF981DE04,He also explains that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers. He explains the idea very well ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b5f4daebcccc,D4CAF981DE04,want to welcome many people to study the world to see whats its like to know when something is gonna happen or how its gonna happen. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8a27f820a652,D4CAF981DE04,"Sometimes studying things can be real helpful because you can learn so many things about it. The article states, ¨These differences in the speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times we are closer to
+
+Venus.¨ ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+85be5b5c4586,D4CAF981DE04,"This indicate that anything could happen if we touch one of those planets. He addresses the speed in the planets when it orbits the sun. Anything can go wrong if its always going like that. Its like having something spinning around everyday. Eventually, something is gonna go wrong and its gonna mess everything up. On the other hand, People who study space would know the answer to what will happen if they was to touch. The author basically wants others to care about the world. He wants others to see both parts of the world. It doesnt matter if something is bad you should still have respect and love in it because its here for a reason ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+106a339af461,D4CAF981DE04,He stated ¨ Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. This means that if we are traveling and something goes wrong we shouldnt have to stop traveling because of the dangers. We should be able to still travel to avoid giving people so much worries. Traveling should be expanded to reach like different destinations so people can see whats its like to care for the world and whats its like to not csre care for the world. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4df5883a8e5f,D4CAF981DE04,"In conclusion, studying the world can be a big part of helping the world understand the parts of whats going on around. What the aurthor does is he explains his thoughts on Venus and give real facts after to show that he understands some parts of Venus. Despite the fact that he is caring about the dangers that can be caused around us; he wants to take a look at both sides. Thats how he supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despte the dangers so well.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eca9ece6fb75,D4E3104E7591,"To assure students are continuing to learn over the summer, some schools assign summer projects. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f8ea09833a66,D4E3104E7591,"A school summer project should be teacher designed even though it puts more work onto a teachers part, but it is better than getting poor projects from confused students in the beginning of a school year. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0e3d3c65e9c0,D4E3104E7591,"Projects already bring stress to students, especially since its summer and all students want to do is hangout with friends or do anything school related. Having a teacher design the project is both relieving and easier, because the student has a foundation of what to do ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a424d19841cc,D4E3104E7591,"they meet the requirements needed from the teacher, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bc8ed0f30763,D4E3104E7591,so that they do not waste time on a project that may not even be right. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6b58f8c40118,D4E3104E7591,"If the student has a based foundation of what to do to begin with, the project already becomes easier to do. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+85c336c2470a,D4E3104E7591,"With guide lines already set up, the student can continue forth and begin the project successfully. Let us say it was a textbook reading and project based on the reading. Students, for the most part, do not generally enjoy reading pages on pages on pages; however, if a teacher gives a blank statement about what to do, the readings become difficult for the student to comprehend. In a students mind, it can go many different ways to think about a project. Having a teacher design a project base gives the student more to go off of instead of a teacher saying ""Read these pages and submit a project by the beginning of the school year"" is not helpful. By giving a foundation of the project, the student can succeed and be more efficient. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d81046ccac8e,D4E3104E7591,"Meeting the requirements of any project whether it is during the school year or outside in daily life is so important, because the requirements is where a person is scored based on their work provided. For a student, requirements are on a rubric which helps guide the way of a assignment or project. For an example, writing essays are difficult in a way of being confident in their work. Usually reverting to guide lines given by the teacher help boost the confidence of work to submit. Receiving requirements by a teacher give assurance to the student by being able to look and see if they have missed anything or gotten all requirements checked off. For a student, being able to receive such assurance relieves us of stress. The stress will always be there, but some of it would have disappeared. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4739448cdeb3,D4E3104E7591,"If a summer project was student based, a lot of students would be unsure and confused on what to do. Students do not want to waste time on a project they have no idea what to do. It is both a waste of the students time, but also a waste of the teachers time by grading projects that are not correct. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+55852b448929,D4E3104E7591,"Also, student based projects have a variety of choices and decisions on whether or not a project is good or bad. Like if a reading was about a mall and how it effects the choice a student has on how to spend time, there are many directions a project could go from there. Students as a whole could easily waste time on a project by procrastinating, but usually it is because they are not sure on what to do. There will always be a student who does not finish in time or even starts it, but those who try and do work efficiently tend to do better time wise. Instead of wasting a student and a teachers time, it is better to have a foundation of a project given by a teacher than having everything be up to and decided by the student. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6c83918f2b2,D4E3104E7591,"Having a teacher designed project is beneficial to both a student and a teacher. Work gets put into from both sides, the teacher and the student, to produce an amazing outcome of a project that meets requirements, was time efficient, and also gets the idea of the project. If it were to be the opposite and were to be student based, it would have had a fifty to fifty chance of it having a good or bad project that could not meet requirements, wasted time, and did not get the point of the project. The sole reason of a summer project is to show a student learning, if the project was not good, the project had no affect on the students learning.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4f2a51089e1b,D54B7CC9CDD4,"The planet Venus, is called Earth's ""twin"" when in reality they are only the same size. Venus is a dangerous planet, our spacecrafts haven't been able to land in three decades. The author of this article gives us evidence that scientists are still trying to find a way to land on its surface. Why? They know it's a dangerous misson, they know somebody could get hurt. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+60f433484001,D54B7CC9CDD4,"Venus's thick atmosphere is made up of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, which blankets the whole planet. The average temperature is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience. Scientists should know that if they try and send a spacecraft full of men to Venus and land they are risking lives. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8a7e25ba9812,D54B7CC9CDD4,"Scientists want to study the planet on how it used to be, they belive it used to be just like Earth and it could've supported living things. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc77126bf4a4,D54B7CC9CDD4,"The surface of the planet has similar feautures that resemble our valleys, moutains and craters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffa1c44f0217,D54B7CC9CDD4,NASA has one exciting idea for sending a spacecraft back but it would take time and money from the government. Don't get me wrong I don't like the idea of sending humans to Venus but ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa32a0cc1310,D54B7CC9CDD4,"it is survivable. It is possible, using solar power and creating a floating blimp-like vehicle. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c5cc6a52d42,D54B7CC9CDD4,"The writer is right, it is worthy to study into and pursue. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9e5db4791e35,D54B7CC9CDD4,It would be a huge victory for use if something like this happened. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+743137d6901a,D582384A4FE6,Using this technology that could read emotional expressions of students is very valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+af1833f85a2b,D582384A4FE6,"Imagine someone acting to be really happy with a big smile in their face, and then actually being upset about something. The article had a lot of possitive points about this technology. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2cb69f6079e0,D582384A4FE6,A lot of people would say no to this technology because they are getting checked by a computer ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f22d735392b6,D582384A4FE6,Some are also very excited to see if the computer would actually say how they are feeling and their imotions they are feeling. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+80fbcc5e3c32,D582384A4FE6,It can calculate how you feel just by constructing your face and seeing how all 44 mucles of your face are. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+596b5f18afd5,D582384A4FE6,"Dr. Huang says ""the facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expresion. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5c805752262,D582384A4FE6,even when people try to change the way their face acts. The computer may still know how your actual emotions are. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06bb43146c02,D582384A4FE6,These new technology is so amazing because it can even be on your own PC. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d713f4422da1,D582384A4FE6,"Scientst have used these technology to in many things. They have used it specially in the famous art work of Leonardo da Vinci's, Mona Lisa. They have found out how she was actually feeling when she was being drawn. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfe299e6da4e,D582384A4FE6,These new technology can actually calculate every emotion. Even if it is in the past. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd301f85cb8b,D582384A4FE6,All these amazing things about this technology should be valuable in classroom. The students would be able to study new things about how this actually works. How it can make everyone feel better about it. The students actually doing this things with these technology would actually make them a bit happier. This is why this technology that reads expressions should be valuable in a classroom ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d002d0d92a40,D594C2B7582D,you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you do not know how your life going to be and it is a huge and amazing opportunity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7ddfcdfe7f7c,D594C2B7582D,You will be helping others who been affected by World War ll. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88642ea73bee,D594C2B7582D,You will be able to travel places you never been ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d4555df204d,D594C2B7582D,China or the Pacific Ocean. You can get a chance to go to Greece and see wat it is like out there and get a chance to get out of the USA. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d1a169d1badc,D594C2B7582D,You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program and help the poor and homeless people get in the UNRRA so they will not be hungry and live a better life. You casn help all the people. in Europe and give them food and stuff so they do not starve to death and try to get them a home and thery will not be left out and hungry. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6cc63beb2308,D594C2B7582D,If you join the Seagoing Cowboys Program you can see the horses and feed them and stuff. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+122674ce4d69,D594C2B7582D,Some people love animals so they can help out with the horese and other animals. You will have the Nightwatch and go and see iuf all the cows and horses are on the ship. But when it is raining and nyou on nightwatchb you will have to be careful because you can slip and break your bone or crack them and even worse you caN slip off the deck and be in the ocean or where you go but if you slip off there are some strong currents that can pull you down and you can drown or they can pull you away from the ship and take you to a island         ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+812937479ee0,D5D1E85B3EC4,"In this story we read about how Dr. Huang made a program thathe can install in computers so it can read people emotional expressions. And how they used it on a pease of art called Mona Lisa. They tested it in her and it worked it predicded what she might have felt when they were drawing her at the moment. They started testing it on other people as well. But it can only read certian emotions like happy, sad, fearful, angry, disgusted and some other ones. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dc89b869ff53,D5D1E85B3EC4,The program was created by Dr. Huang he was inspired by something to make this program. Well honestly im not sure but im guessing he was. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1a0f0ba4a21,D5D1E85B3EC4,His program has been a successful program so far they want ot add it to school computers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+018e55418a56,D5D1E85B3EC4,If a student is on a program and the students feels confused the program will imadicly modify what the student is doing to make it a better understanding for them so says Dr. huang. Isnt that just great huh saves us all from rasing our hand to get the teachers attenion frm helping someone els. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+728f66f41b64,D5D1E85B3EC4,This program will be designed to help students when in need of help while using a computer at school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6315b0788ba1,D5D1E85B3EC4,"But is the program really needed , can the teacheers not just simply come and help te students out? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+44c44077c3fd,D5D1E85B3EC4,i supouse and hope the teacher does help . I mean after all i would like to be helped if i needd the help ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66174529f6fb,D5D1E85B3EC4,But i also know that sometimes the teacher is to busy helping other kids or even maybe other teachers ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9e00de9ba1f7,D5D1E85B3EC4,i personialty think the program would be awesome to have. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+95ca8ebb74f4,D5D1E85B3EC4,"The way
+
+Dr. Huang designed the program can only read certain emotons . It reads the most comman ones we all have ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+898f32477f30,D5D1E85B3EC4,"For example when tsted on Mona lisa it read 83 percent happy, 9percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 2 percent angry. If you were to go to the computre and have your emotions read what do you think you it owuld read for you? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bca29c7cb074,D5D1E85B3EC4,"After all that reading of how Dr. Huang made a program to read our emtions i want to test it out my self wouldn't you? Its amazing how it could read the emotions out of the art work . Who would have thought there was som much feeling under that paint. She was have alot of feeling while geting painted i see.
+
+Most be nice being one of the lucky people to get to test it out. But dont forget it could only read certian emotions.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4b5491a26704,D5D31918A943,"The number of fatal crashes caused by cell phone distracted driving in 2017 was 434 (""Facts and Statistics: Distracted Driving""). The amount of fatal accidents from the use of cell phones while driving has only gotten worse through the years. Ever since cell phones have become more advanced and more popular, the danger has increased. It is hard enough to stay focused while driving but phones make that task 10 times as difficult. Even something as simple as changing the song or answering a text for a split second while driving can put yourself and others at risk. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+83cf9b62ec08,D5D31918A943,"Teens play a big part in all of this, being the most likely to use cell phones on the road. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+30cf14f79acc,D5D31918A943,"Teenagers are not as experienced drivers and think that driving is a task they can take with ease. Although driving might come easy for some, that does not give room to be distracted. I personally witness cell phones being used on the road daily. My mom and my dad both use talk-to-text while driving and my boyfriend holds his phone in one hand while driving with the other. My friend and I almost got into an accident the other day because she was using her phone. Nowadays society is far too attached to technology, especially phones. Not only are teens learning that using phones while driving is acceptable from their parents, they also think that breaking the law is nothing to stress. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d2a6e0b8ee4,D5D31918A943,"In mosts states it is illegal to even have your cell phone in your hand let alone be using it or talking on the phone while driving. If the law is not enough to persuade people to stop using phones while driving, the dangers of killing people should. Close to five thousand people died due to cell phone related crashes in 2018 (Texting and Driving Statistics 2019, thezebra. com). Even if someone is not on the phone themselves, someone else on the road could be ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5bd52e00afe1,D5D31918A943,"When someone decides to use their phone while driving they are not only putting themselves at risk, they are endangering every other person on the road ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1e3735f905db,D5D31918A943,"If they look away from the road for even one second and become distracted, they could crash into another person. There could be children in the car that die from the crash, or a pregnant woman. Lives are constantly at stake while in the car, being distracted only makes things worse. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a1241a736c4,D5D31918A943,"Cell phone use behind the wheel reduces the amount of brain activity associated with driving by 37 percent (Cell Phone use while driving statistics and texting and driving facts, teendriversource. org) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18574a426cfa,D5D31918A943,Teenagers just starting to drive and adults already driving should take preventative measures to be more safe on the road ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f49d88381511,D5D31918A943,"They could finish a call or text before they begin driving, leave the phone alone while stopped, and put the phone on silent or do not disturb when driving. Most phones now have a driving more that will mute notifications and send a text back to inform the person they are driving. Even if someone is not driving they can still help. If they call someone who happens to be driving, they can say they will call them back later at a better time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c3abc13c7574,D5D31918A943,"Society as a whole can and should be better and form good habits by not using a cell phone while driving. Distracted driving is a serious topic and the deaths need to be decreased desperately. The safety of people's lives are nothing to take lightly. Even if someone does something as simple as changing the song or answering a text, that automatically puts them and everyone around them in danger ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+09cde0e20bb6,D5D31918A943,We all need to do the right thing by following the law and give up phones while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+73d6cfad0587,D5FDDB4DFA82,"For most students, summer means the beginning of a much needed months-long break from school. For some, however, the stress of school never fades away. Some schools require that students complete assigned summer projects in order to continue learning, even when not in school. The importance of continued education is rarely argued, but the way some projects are planned out might not always result in engagement and time investment from the student. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1ed20cec8bdb,D5FDDB4DFA82,"To combat this, schools should allow students to design their own projects ",Position,Adequate,,,
+73ca6a1429c9,D5FDDB4DFA82,This would assist in motivating them to put their best work in ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa8e216ad7fb,D5FDDB4DFA82,"less stress upon the student, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+936cb0b4982e,D5FDDB4DFA82,"helping them feel a sense of pride and accomplishment in their finished product. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4dc23dc175fb,D5FDDB4DFA82,"As a student who has had to deal with a multitude of summer projects, I can say without a doubt that I have never looked forward to spending time out of my day to work on them. The most typical summer project given to me and most students has been summer reading. The books are almost always teacher assigned, subsequently tying them into their curriculum for the upcoming year. Before my junior year began, I was tasked with reading
+
+In Cold Blood by Truman Capote for my English class. Personally, I enjoyed the book, but the project that went along with it was less than interesting. In turn, this led to me putting off my project until the last few days of my summer break, bringing along the stress of having to cram it in before the school year started. Since this project was teacher-designed, I also had to make sure to follow the strict guidelines in order to ensure a high grade when I turned it in to the teacher. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a756a1ea887a,D5FDDB4DFA82,"If I was able to create my own project relating to the book rather than a teacher-designed project, I truly believe I would have enjoyed my finished product more than I did, along with eliminating the stress put upon me by the project's strict guidelines. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ec00c21f37fb,D5FDDB4DFA82,"When a student is assigned a summer project, their immediate thoughts are almost always negative. This comes with the fact that they do not want to do work over their break, as this is one of the few times out of the year that they're allowed to forget about school for just one moment. Adding to this, if the student is given a teacher-designed project, this puts the motivation to do said project even lower than before. They know that they have no control over how their project turns out, as they often revolve around a fairly black-and-white rubric, resulting in a lack of diversity and creativity between each individual's project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fb0036671c6f,D5FDDB4DFA82,"If a student is tasked with the creation of their own project, however, this leads to a wide variety of exciting and new projects that vary from student to student, also placing motivation in their hearts to make the best project they possibly can. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fd848418ea71,D5FDDB4DFA82,"Often after a teacher-designed project is finished, the only reaction of the student is relief that it's finally over. With teacher-designed projects, students often only work to completion, not to make a project they enjoy. However, if students are able to design their own projects, the reactions to their finished product would give them self-pride that they created what they believe to be their best work. For example, when I created a project after reading
+
+The Road by Cormac McCarthy, I was able to look at my completed project with the feeling of pride and joy that I had truly created the best project I possibly could. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d58269e3e65,D5FDDB4DFA82,The increase in moral for these students would give them a more enjoyable learning environment and the excitement of a new school year starting so that they're able to share their work with someone else who will appreciate it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+082c83697ae0,D5FDDB4DFA82,"Many teachers would argue that the creation of student-designed projects would be unimportant to the curriculum, as they don't truly focus on something that needs to be taught. However, the importance of student-designed projects is to encourage them to be creative and to not be stuck in the mindset of just passing the class, instead opening their eyes to new ideas and allowing them to think outside the box. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+45b5983d68d7,D60320508249,"By being allowed to design their own summer projects, students are afforded significantly many more opportunities to learn outside of the classroom and are also able to accomplish their project with a degree of flexibility, letting them both enjoy their time off but also retain information that they learned the previous year. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7851bf2a7eac,D60320508249,Many students have quite the chaotic schedule during the summer months. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+10cc3975c138,D60320508249,"Between jobs, internships, and trying to enjoy their time away from school, it's easy for teacher-assigned work to get tossed by the wayside during this time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e7c8ff044191,D60320508249,"By letting their summer work be student-driven, kids will be able to adapt their commitments to their teacher's desire to have them continue their learning over the break and not have to worry about finishing assignments by deadlines that they already know aren't possible for them to meet. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f5e80cee5ec4,D60320508249,"For example, if a student is going to Latin America over the summer, instead of having them mindlessly conjugate verbs on worksheets to submit for their Spanish class, they can actually put what they learned to use out in the world by talking with locals or taking in the culture through music and food. If another student doesn't happen to have a passport and a couple thousand dollars lying around, they can adjust it to their situation, for example going to a local Latin grocery store and buying ingreedients in Spanish in order to make a native dish. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9627ffd88101,D60320508249,"However, the opportunities extend beyond just languages and cultures. If a student is interning at a company in a different city, they have to learn a variety of skills, one of which being how to budget correctly. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+76b59630d7f3,D60320508249,"Here, they can employ what they learned in their math class in order to help them out with their finances by figuring out how much things will cost and what percentages of their money will have to go to which necessity. Again, this applies to everyone, as students who don't have that opportunity still get the chance to apply their math abilities to their own lives, as they might want to figure out how to divide up their paychecks from their summer job between spending and saving money. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f42618550886,D60320508249,"These examples highlight another main benefit of letting students design their own summer projects, that being the increased opportunities that are availible outside of the classroom. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+80eb26f3ce2d,D60320508249,"Instead of having one general project assigned by the teacher that is monotonus and isn't any different than regular school, students can customize their learning to their specific situation and access things that aren't availible inside the classroom. Students that are interested in making music can apply for internships at music studios that have nicer equipment than their school. Students that enjoy writing can work with local journalists and get a feel for what writing is like for a bigger publication than just their school paper. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+df246fb00a70,D60320508249,"One might be thinking at this point, ""Come on now. This is great for all the kids who are motivated to learn and are enough of a go-getter to go out and do this stuff, but what about the ones who just want to sit inside and play video games or hang out with their friends?"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0ae3eba18e45,D60320508249,This is where the real beauty of student-designed work comes in. Even those who don't want to have to sacrifice their precious three months of freedom can still get in valuable time applying what they learned the previous school year. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+984672b01b51,D60320508249,"Spend your summer days inside playing video games? Calculate your win rate or determine your average time taken to complete certain levels. Prefer to hang out with your buddies at the pool all day? Determie your arc in the air doing different tricks off the diving board. The ability to adapt one's schedule to their situation is infinitely better than doing some general assignment handed out by a teacher, for all types of people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e94c76ca1979,D60320508249,"If students can create their own project that is specific to their life over the summer, then they are accomplishing several goals. It allows them to actually get the work done, instead of being unable to do so based off of their schedule. It lets them be interested in their learning instead of complaining about a boring stack of worksheets that that have to robotically complete. Most importantly, however, it gives them the chance to experience things outside of the classroom that are both personalized to their lives and also accomplishing their teacher's goal of getting them to continue to learn information, ensuring that student-designed projects present the best of both worlds. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9dd1a71a9ddb,D67BA770AB5C,"The author suggest Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents and i completly agree with that . But im here to prove why his idea is valuable and correct. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+fe813506eb7b,D67BA770AB5C,"The author supported his idea in many ways but one way he really showed me how well it was supported was when the article stated ""Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffe23ae4aa68,D67BA770AB5C,"What the author is trying to prove with this is the danger despite it presents by being really close to earth. Something else that is really important for us to know is the speed and space. Yea it might not be as important but the author wrote it because he thought it was something important to know . What he means with speed and space is that, With speed it means that sometime Venus is closer to Earth but also sometimes Mars is closer and this because the rate of speed going through. In space is the numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world because of humans. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f73b845804ce,D67D59D24822,I think it a good thing if technology could read students emotional ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8deffabb484d,D67D59D24822,becuesa if you were haveing a Bad day then it could hlep you have a lot more of a good day then what you haedded like let say you were geting pick on at school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50a46158c72d,D67D59D24822,Then it would show u how to take care of someone how been picking on or let say that you just did not have a good day. Then it put on viens or thing that make u laught into u cry or it put on some cat that are funny. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9baf6a4cc9a,D67D59D24822,I think it is a good thing then all you will have to do is say to your computers how do i feel today it will say to you ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ef50febfd5f8,D67D59D24822,"like It say in fact, we humans perform this same impressive calculation every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial is feeling simply by the look on her face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7ed47cf8f7de,D67D723785A7,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" the author explains how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computes to know if a human is sad, happy, confused, angry, fearful or disgusted. Also the author describes how this would help teacher in their classes to identify if students are bored or tired making it eassier for teachers to find another way to get students attention. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a5009e412f99,D67D723785A7,In my opinion this would be a good idea for schools to use and make a more eficient way of teaching students and teachers differents ways to teach and learn making it more fun and less tireding for everyone. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fb0ab67f17ee,D67D723785A7,Although this may be expensive and students will not like a computer to read their emotions because it would be weird for them and it also may be unconterfull for students having a computer to just say their feelings in front of a class. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fdb36771d4a0,D67D723785A7,The Facial Action Coding System ( FACS) is a great idea for schools as I said earlier but I do not see how it could help in other things. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2d8de28e4c89,D67D723785A7,"The article describes how this new technology can identify human emotions but it does not explains how would it work in society or it will help people understand one another better. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51d1bcefe087,D67D723785A7,"The FACS can tell your emotions by the way the muscles in the face move making it easier for the computer to identify what emotion the human is felling. They use video imagery to create a new emotion- recognition software tracks these facial movemets. Also the new technology can identify mixed emotions.
+
+The article also describes how by making a expression can make you feel slighty the expresion that was just used. According to Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. This may happen because weunconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f441e5f142c5,D67D723785A7,In conclution this article demostrates you how can a new technology can hal you understand other peoples emotions even if they are trying to hide them. Also it helps people to understan how they are really feeling and how does emotions work when we express them.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d80298bb43f0,D69416DBA6F4,"Do we want stress, sadness, and a constant rush in students of the school? No! Then there shouldn't be an idea of making all students participate in an extracurricular activity. If the students want to participate, then they can. Forcing them to participate, however, isn't right. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa08f6d24280,D69416DBA6F4,I disagree with having all students participate in extracurricular activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a7c8002df0df,D69416DBA6F4,because the school would be crowded ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ca3640bdbee8,D69416DBA6F4,homework time would be decreased for students ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b2a415e9ab5e,D69416DBA6F4,"students who are already in a club or program outside of school would have to rush to or even quit the activity that they are enrolled in. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d738137f5990,D69416DBA6F4,"Hundreds of students would attempt to get into a variety of clubs. If a specific club, though, is very popular, then with all the students trying to get in, the space would be limited. The students who are rejected from the group might not have another club that they are willing to join, but they will have to find one. This can lead to sadness, anger, jealousy to other people who got in, and other bad feelings. Bad cases of these feelings can lead to stress, fights, and even broken friendships. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a43aa8011fa,D69416DBA6F4,"For students who may receive lots of homework, having to do extracurricular activities, other things at home, and the homework can cause stress and also cause students to stay up late and lose sleep time. With all of this, the students could possibly forget about their homework and their grades will drop because of it. With all of these things, the students won't have time to relax at home after a long day. Without proper sleep at night, the students could fall asleep in class and get in trouble. The cycle will continue and the students in the school won't be attentive enough to learn anything in their classes. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f0be3f275b7d,D69416DBA6F4,"They will have to rush to attend their activities, or have to quit because they will never have time to attend the activity. This could also cause stress because they could have to rush to activities that are usually much smoother and easier to attend. They could like their activity more than the schools' activity but have to quit it. Then they will be able to attend the school activity, but have to give up the activity they like more. That is wrong and a student should never be put in that situation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2102b7cc9e5,D69416DBA6F4,"People who support the principals idea may say things like ""the more activities, the better"", or ""now the students have things to do with their friends ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+85a912c757b9,D69416DBA6F4,"but the students should have freedom over what they do. At least, if anything, contact the students' parents and ask them for approval. Don't just force them to, though, because it's not right to force students to participate in any activities that they aren't interested in doing. With this, I believe that the students should have the freedom to choose and not have to participate in any activity if they aren't intrigued. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+845ea817b48b,D69416DBA6F4,"I strongly disagree with the idea of making all students participate in extracurricular activities. If the students want to participate, then they can. If they don't want to participate or join, then they shouldn't have to. With how crowded it would be, the loss of homework time it would bring, and stress causing it would create, I don't believe that students should be forced into that. I believe the students should be given the choice, and if some of them don't accept, try to convince others. Instead of making them all participate, ask them what activities they like and improve the clubs or create new clubs based on their opinions ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ca4c4f0e82b3,D6A32ABCAB53,"Luke Bomberger had a friend who asked him to tour Europe with him, he knew he couldn't turn it down.
+
+World War II had just been in Europe, but was now over. Many comturies were left in ruins. These contries needed animals and livestock to survive. The UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of the livestock on the boats when they were being shipped to a certain part of the world to another. Luke and his friend wanted to care and help, so they signed up for seagoing cowboys program.
+
+Luke had turned 18 upon the first trip, which meant he could be drafted for the army. His draft amnagement company had learned he was in the seagoing cowboys, and they told him to keep doing what he was doing, because it was a form of help.
+
+Sometimesthe weather was bad upon the boats, and sometimes it was good. When it was bad, members upon the boat would participate in watching the storms. One night Luke had watch, he got into a bad accident that left him without work for a couple days due to broken ribs. When the weather was good, and all the chores were done for the day, the men upon the ship had time to play games or travel to see things. The animals are what kept Luke busy though.
+
+When Luke had quit the seagoing cowboys, he had successfully completed nine trips, the most trips a seagoing cowboy has ever done, delivering animals to people in need of them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6e211b9cd36,D6AAE9DC566D,"Nowadays when you are walking or even driving you see a lot of people with a smartphone, that's because 61.62% of our population has one. There are a lot of reasons why people are on their cellphones while driving. As well there are pros and cons of driving while texting. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c68f1d88f8c7,D6AAE9DC566D,Throughout many years the stats of accidents while on their phone has also increased. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63e5c0cb4adf,D6AAE9DC566D,"Each year there are approximately 1.6 million car accidents throughout the United States. Many of those are accidents due to texting and driving, almost 400,000 injuries a year. This means 1 out of 4 car accidents are due to distractions while texting and driving. There is an average of 3287 deaths a day, just by usage of cellphones while driving. Stats show that the average age of accidents occur during young ages 17-30 years of age. In a survey, people were asked how many people text and drive and their answer was pretty shocking reporting more than 80% of the people has or done while driving.
+
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a2783f8aa0cc,D6AAE9DC566D,"As to all the things there are pros and cons, but in this topic, there are cons and thoughts what people think are pros. Nowadays technology is an everyday usage, us being away or not checking our phones consistently makes us feel the need to be plugged in. The majority of the scenes where people do this act end up in a car crash. Hurting yourself or even getting killed is not the only danger you take, you also put other peoples life in danger. In some cases you could hit someone hurt them really badly, or even kill them. Remembering what you did to the other person would not be your only punishment, you could go to jail and spend a long time in their just for the distraction of a couple seconds. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9084b622b06,D6AAE9DC566D,Some of the reasons why people think its a good thing is because they feel the need to be communicated with the world just in case something bad happens or basically if something bad happens on their way and feels the need to communicate it with someone or has an emergency. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a7e697f00fc0,D6AAE9DC566D,Every person has a different excuse or reason why they are texting and driving but in overall there are some that are the most common of them all. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+37991b384ebe,D6AAE9DC566D,"You would imagine that being on a phone call would be top 3 or 5, but it's not that commun seeing people on a phone call. One of the main reasons it's obviously texting. Another big reason is facebook, snapchat, any social media. A big reason is the camera, women just be taking pictures or videos of themselves, while on the other side guys have the trend to speed, or drive recklessly and record it to show it off. You also have people who find it entertaining to shop online or be reading the news as well as checking the weather. When people are really bored while driving or get stuck in traffic for a long period of time they are also watching videos or even movies. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5ec4e8f5d47b,D6AAE9DC566D,"In conclusion, texting and driving is really not a great idea, while it comes to texting or being on a phone call. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a55d231ebfda,D6AAE9DC566D,"That important text you need to answer or send can wait a couple minutes while you get to somewhere safe. Risking your life and others just to get that good quality picture is not worth it. People around you that care about you, will truly understand that you couldn't answer in that exact moment.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+08394bd9b3e6,D6B40BD81818,"In "" The Challenges of Exsploring Venus"" how the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is by comparing venus to earth ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f1ca761366c2,D6B40BD81818,"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1f6dce77eb8,D6B40BD81818,What i think the author is trying to say is that Venus is very much like earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e827298d95a,D6B40BD81818,"even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's athmosphere."" Why i think this is a detail that supports the claim is becouse in paragraph 3 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bdae0f009ab0,D6B40BD81818,the author list all of the negitives about Venus of how the temeture is exstreamly hot and how thick the atmosphere is and how the the clouds are filled with highly corrosive acid. despite all of these things about Venus it is still interesting exslpore and to learn about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e07660364d2,D6B40BD81818,In conclusion our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but shoud be exspaned to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0bfe3badcff8,D6CB8B37F0C0,I thinck for the emotional things of the technology is kind of more advanced like every moment they do something different ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+85e7cdb106c9,D6CB8B37F0C0,they always have to make a digital and some other people don't really get about the digital things they get lose really easlly and for some other people is more likely an easy thing to do but not always because it has their difficulties and they are challenging so they have to do it right or they will mess up the photo ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8310e7ba3005,D6CB8B37F0C0,and theirs a conclusion about this and is kind of creepy that now computer can easlly detect the movement of our facil ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+02a455a7f7d9,D6CB8B37F0C0,"guess what they mean like emotions and other things that's on our faces but i think it helps people to understand how things work and how our selfs are doing if their mad, sad, happy etc. there is better ways for humans and computers to communicate not only by facial recognizing, all the software of all the people are different and computers softwarre is just way different then humans it just takes time to figure this out quickly. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a726a4f18e91,D6CB8B37F0C0,things can actually change from good to sometimes bad and it's not the way to show their expresion that has been having by the other kind of people. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+05241553444d,D75B4D14CCAB,"Becoming a seagoing cowboy means that you would take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that are being shipped overseas to other countries that need to recover their animals from World War II. It may sound like a lot of work but is can be very rewarding. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4edd26943d43,D75B4D14CCAB,I was able to spend a lot of my time with friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ff6f59694da,D75B4D14CCAB,able to do some sightseeing in other countries ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+61a877c948a4,D75B4D14CCAB,I was also able to learn a lot about animals just from taking care of them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+728b12993974,D75B4D14CCAB,I hope that you choose to become a seagoing cowboy. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a26ad47d6c9,D75B4D14CCAB,you would learn a lot about animals ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f995b5d0282,D75B4D14CCAB,"I was able to learn a lot of body language from the animals. I now know when an animal is nervous or angry. I can tell when a horse is calm and happy. Knowing animal body language may help you not get a broken bone from being kicked by an angry horse or cow. You will also learn how to take care of the animals. I already knew how to take care of some of the animals from working on my aunt's farm, but I learned how to care for animals a lot faster from doing it hundreds of times everyday. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f6cbef2f8ebd,D75B4D14CCAB,I was able to spend a lot of time with my friends on the trip back to America. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5d7b708f806,D75B4D14CCAB,"All of my friends and I loved playing sports, like volleyball and table-tennis, in the empty holds where we kept the animals. We also shared stories and games that some of us had never even heard of. I learned many fun stories and games that I now pass on to others today. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d04fb597770d,D75B4D14CCAB,the sightseeing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0c2a8a1ca17,D75B4D14CCAB,"While we were in another country, we had some time to go sightseeing. I was able to tour an excavated castle in Crete. I took a gondala ride in Italy and saw the Panama Canal. I also learned a lot about culture. I learned how bad things can be in other countries after wars. It made me more aware of the people and their needs in other countries. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5806ff8d75a4,D75B4D14CCAB,"I loved the opportunity to become a seagoing cowboy, even if it was for a short period of time. I was able to learn animal body language and more about how to take care of the animals. I was able to see many great things like the castle in Crete and the Panama Canal. I also learned about culture in many other countries and some of the hardships of living there. The trips made me more aware of the hardships every person in other countries face every, single day of their lives. I hope that all of these reasons convinced you to become a seagoing cowboy.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9310a3995752,D7A4DB22C8EB,The author of The Challenge of Exploring Venus suggested to study venus is a worthy pursuit despite it condtions and or dangerous risks. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bb411ec27097,D7A4DB22C8EB,"I think the author thinks studying Venus is worthy based of the author saying in Paragragh five althought it is 170° F(Fahrenheit) it may be difficultt condtions, but it still survivable for humans. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ac8d8bb9edb,D7A4DB22C8EB,More evidence of it being worthy of studying is in Paragragh seven saying NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae0576bcb00d,D7A4DB22C8EB,"From one of there examples, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions, meaning it is possible to find research. Research is our only way of getting data proven in Paragragh six stating ""researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+448dcba14c51,D7A4DB22C8EB,"And my final piece of evidance stating it is worthy of studying Venus is in Paragragh's six and eight ""peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3811f7d58fee,D7A4DB22C8EB,"because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e4d507b88308,D7F4D3366332,The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) machine developed by Dr. Paul Eckman is turning the tides of facial expression recognition. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b2bbcad7ed84,D7F4D3366332,"It is able to distinguish individual expressions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness which humans can find hard to do making it vital to being infused into the use of schools. ",Position,Effective,,,
+2295e7b39460,D7F4D3366332,Teachers would be able to learn more of their students and improve on their curriculums in order to satisfy the needs of their students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dbbca46a4d40,D7F4D3366332,"The FACS machine would be able to tell whether a student is lying, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+42583378d19d,D7F4D3366332,"needs emotional support and help, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fae296d8b6a0,D7F4D3366332,see whether they understand the lesson or not making the machine essential to school life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+18488a122b78,D7F4D3366332,"When it comes to school, students will not always tell the truth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0136f0f7a08a,D7F4D3366332,"They may lie about not doing their homework or be untruthful about whether they were involved in a fight. The FACS machine could solve that issue as it is able to determine whether someone is lying or not based on their expression which is stated in the quote,"" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ""smiling"" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful."" This machine is able to examine the details of one's face to find out if they are lying or not. It examines the key traits of each specific emotion and if they are not meant, that is how it knows whther the truth has been told or not. Students will no longer bee able to weasel their way out of punishment due to their superior lying skills as the FACS machine is able to see through the lies. This is not the only thing this machine can do though for schools. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+08b74fddb113,D7F4D3366332,This mechanism is able to determine the emotions of a student and see if they need help or not. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b348d460718f,D7F4D3366332,"It can read a total of six emotions with some branches coming off of those emotions. The six emotions are stated in the quote,"" Eckman has classified six basic emotions - happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness - and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles."" The machine is able to determine whether a student is in distress or not thus telling the teacher to help the student out with the problem that they are facing. The teacher would be able to help the student cope and deal with their emotional sadness or anger and tell them how to deal with it in order to assist them in getting through it. This is not the end though of what this incredible machine can do for a school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+42b94aac1e4d,D7F4D3366332,Students may not understand a lesson and are having troubles getting through it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b666af8e27af,D7F4D3366332,"SInce humans find the task of reading emotions diffficult, a teacher may not be able to see this and help the student out but this machine can deal with that problem too. How the machine deals with this horrible issue is state in the statement,"" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" This quote shows how the FACS mechanism would be able to tell if a student is bored which would signal the teacher to modiffy the lesson in order for it to be better understood. Students would no longer have to complain about not understanding their homework or curriculum. This would allow for better grades and better lives for the students in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3f7737aaa32c,D7F4D3366332,"In conclusion, the FACS machine would be essential to the lives of students in a classroom. Teachers would b able to make the experience of school even better than it is already and easier than it is already. No student would have to struggle anymore which is key to the success of a school as everyone would learn greatly and effecttively. The machine would deal with the problems of whether a student is telling the truth or not, whether a student is in need of emotional support or not, and whether a student needs help understanding the curriculum and lesson that they are learning. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e1218b495336,D8013F49DE51,Nowadays it have been many car accidents and deaths due to driving while distracted. The main distraction is your own phone. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+54ba2492bb42,D8013F49DE51,I think this should completely changed around and make it to the point where they should take away when driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4416d643de1c,D8013F49DE51,"The reasons why cell phones should not be used while driving are fairly obvious, because even a two-second distraction - taking your eyes off the road to pick up your phone and see who's calling you. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc0dad1234ec,D8013F49DE51,Opponents say that cell phones are good because they give an opportunity to make a call in case of emergency. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+92bd9330c7f6,D8013F49DE51,"However, it is illusion of safety because when people need it the most either they can't find it or reach it because they are stuck in car. People shouldn't fully depend on cell phones because they are not reliable, 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e1b3104ac52a,D8013F49DE51,"It turns out that cellphone-use-while-driving laws vary depending on the state that you're in. If you're on a road trip across state lines, troopers might be able to pull you over for something that may be perfectly legal in your home state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a100b44b08a,D8013F49DE51,You should also be aware of how distracted the other drivers around you might be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc6ae8d1aa7a,D8013F49DE51,So as you see all the facts of you shouldn't have your phone while driving have just been justified. Knowing that not only your life is in danger the next person life's in danger. And hop that this can spark a new beginning of getting driving while distracted ban.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5974413ed47f,D84271FC252A,"Have you ever wondered where your best friend was when he or she wasn't on the bus? Chances are there doing something they find interesting at an extracurricular activity. For instance A sport, yearbook club, or even student council. These are all examples of after school activities or extracurricular activities. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7679903f2a90,D84271FC252A,"Partaking in extracurricular activities is a fun way to get yourself involved in doing something you like or trying something new if that thing interests you. Personally I'm all for it, I think that having extracurricular activities is fun and can even be something new. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b55652373217,D84271FC252A,"Signing up for an activity you have never heard of before or haven't done before can be challenging, not knowing what to expect can be very nerve racking but thats how you learn what you like ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+578a893a1516,D84271FC252A,"You can always assume the worst and get the best. When I was in elementary school I thought doing chess club was going to be boring, but I actually learned lot of skills from doing that club and I made a lot of good friends that I still have today. I expected it to be boring and it turned out to be an amazing experience. Personally I always watched others and my own brother do theater for a while, and I finally said to myself in sixth grade to try it out. I had heard of it but never tried it I signed up and 5 months later fell in love. It was one of the most fun things I had ever done! Now this is my last year but if I hadn't tried it who knows where I would be right now. When my best friend was nervous about keyboarding club because he thought he couldn't type fast he didn't even want to sign up so I told him that if he doesn't like it he can quit and try something different, and so he tried it and it turned out that he liked it but didn't want to continue, so he quit and tried robotics and then he loved it. He said it was trial and error and thats true. Having to do one club is fine and if while choosing one it doesn't fit you can always try a different one. In the end trying something new can be a challenge but at the end of the day if the end result isn't what you want you can always try something new. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4090951085bc,D84271FC252A,Theres always a mixed variety so chances are there will be at least one option that can be interesting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b15737089119,D84271FC252A,"I'm in my last year of middle school and my sister is in her last year of Elementary school, we have a lot of differences and when it comes to taste in activities we differ from each other opinions, but we've always loved doing clubs when we were in the same school. She always loved mixing things and stirring and combining things, and on the other hand I always liked going out and playing sports and trying to get better, we moved schools and we were afraid they may not have our go to options but then we realized they had lots of variety and my sister and I knew that we would be happy there. Picking one thing out of so many different options can be hard but with variety there aren't very many repeats of the same thing, thats why when you choose something that interests you its the only thing there of its category, most likely because there are so many other options that theres no real reason for it to exist again and be the same thing. This happened to my mom when she was younger there was no real variety there were only 2-3 options to choose from and that was that. Nowadays when I'm choosing after school activities she tells me be wise because when she was younger she had barely as many as I do today. In the grand total you can always find something you'll like because of variety. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7dc166174fc,D84271FC252A,"Sometimes extracurricular activities can help you realize what you really like to do, but it can also help you find and make friends who have the same interests as you. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b58889403205,D84271FC252A,"When I brought up going to chess club earlier I thought that I would dread it but it turned out to be super fun. I also met some of my best friends that I still talk to today, they were super inviting and had a passion for the game and enjoyed it. I had never seen anyone enjoy a game that much. When thinking about it, it seems like a very funny and interesting story how you met your friends but when I talk to some kids they tell me that they met their best friends of today by simply sharing the same interests and that is a great way to make friends. When going to a certain activity you go because you enjoy that one thing, well the other people there also enjoy that activity and now you know a whole bunch of people who share a common interest with you. sometimes even the smallest things can spark a friendship maybe you and someone play the same position on a sports team that can be a great reason to be friends or to even talk, doing extra curricular activities gets you out of your comfort zone and makes you feel just open and wanting to talk to people. When going to a certain activity thinking of how the people there are gonna act is a huge thing but most likely the environment is very welcoming and it makes you want to keep doing that one thing with the same people because of how they treated you. In conclusion making friends is a big deal and doing an extracurricular activity can play a huge role and help with making friends. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fa74fd61a14a,D84271FC252A,"My first reason on why I agree and think that doing at least one extracurricular activity will help you is because signing up for something you've never heard of or tried seems like a big challenge, but in the end you might really like it or feel like it suited you. My second reason was that theres always a good variety of activitys to do that you really enjoy or might want to do and this goes without saying but having a lot of different choices of specific things will help you narrow down your choices. My third reason is that you can make a lot of friends and have a very long and fun lasting relationship with people that you shared a common interest with. I believe that doing one extracurricular activity isn't a bad thing but a helpful thing to have in your life. In conclusion trying something new can always be fun and inviting.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+003c0657ecfb,D85690C1836A,"Today we will talking about The challenge of Exploring Venus, what's is venus, where is ubicate venus and why is important talk or learn about this subject or who discovered this mean. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+062c7fcb063a,D85690C1836A,"Venus is a planet in our solar system and is the second planet from our sun and occasionally the closest in distance too Earth, Venus, and Mars , in this palnet the scientist can't explore this planet because is so far away from the Heart , and this have some differences, for example; one of these is the speed mean that sometimes we are closer too mars and other times to Venus.
+
+Venus maybe this issue explains why or not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades, scientist said that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, also this planet has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerul earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.
+
+We know that Venus is a planet in our solar system but that we really don't know and scientist wants to know is know about if in that planet probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, human wants to conquer some of those planets to live in the future, that's the reason why the scientist are discussing about that, or if the rich peolpe can build some skyscraper or some building for rich people go to travel in Venus.
+
+NASA is working to know more about Venus, another example is if the electricity can works there, or how we can get it,
+
+Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, more importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.
+
+Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has values, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1fceeb3b0570,D85690C1836A,"We talked about Venus, we know now that human wants no only have more information they want explore and live there, also they want or we wants to know wha't there or if there exist life, but we don't know if Venus got inhabitants is not our planet and we need to leave it, but if we are capable to conquer, our next planet to live in the future would be Mars or also Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+35aecd198b04,D8708AEA9667,"Although in theory a student-designed project sound good, in practice the students will most likely struggle to make the project because of lack of understanding the project. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6197034e7348,D8708AEA9667,a teacher-designed project would be beneficial ,Position,Adequate,,,
+12b647f16dd6,D8708AEA9667,it would be more thought out ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6051f1da0c5c,D8708AEA9667,leave a clear outline of what to do in the project and have more structure then say a student designed project. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83cd6ac5fe35,D8708AEA9667,"When you're a teenager you want to be free as possible but sometimes you are too free, that you don't know what to do with this much freedom so you do nothing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4c8260005e6c,D8708AEA9667,In this sense the project that would be designed by a student most student would have no idea where to start discouraging them for even commencing the project and of course there will be people that can do the project easily but we want to make the project fair and equal for everybody. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1266caa8cf43,D8708AEA9667,a teacher-designed project would be the best option for this summer project because it would let the teacher outline certain thing they want in the project to ensure that the students are still learning over the summer break. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+40713deffa9f,D8AFB0AE804B,"Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion ?
+
+In fact, these emotional expression are seen in differnet forms for example, if your happy you smile, if your sad you dont smile. There are plenty of different way to show your emotionsand how your feel. There is value to how you feel, act in ways that people see in everyday life. The authrs describles how new technology enables to identify human emotion in life. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fbc21f33ef97,D8AFB0AE804B,"Human expression is how your show your emotions to your friends, family, teachers. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6f0125e60dd0,D8AFB0AE804B,"People express their emotions in many ways. Here is an example, Mona Lisa she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry most of the time. that's how she expressed her emotions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65c9a954bd19,D8AFB0AE804B,"Dr. Huang did research on peoples emotions and how people showed their emtions in ways, that he did know how people expressed their emtions with how their face looked to see their emotions show. Dr. Huang looked at the painting of Mona Lisa that Da Vinci painted to show Mona Lisa's emotion in the painting to show, how she felt about being in the painting to express how Da Vinci and Mona Lisa both felt the paintg that both of them liked the painting. Da Vinci emotion to paint a picture of Mona Lisa he felt happy, but he also that she was happy about him painting a picture of her being happy, mad. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6bfef7a7fb0b,D8AFB0AE804B,"In conclusion, the author tells about how to identify human emotions and how they express them in ways. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+11043cd12010,D8D1FA118E4A,"During this paragraph the author would talk about how Venus is like earth well the closest to like being earth. For exaple they even called it its twin and talked about how Venus was once filled with ocean. ""Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a2187d1c258,D8D1FA118E4A,i think what the author is trying to say from this is that he supports the study of Venus because his or her point of view is that it very simialr to earth and it way of being. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+14178abbdcef,D8D1FA118E4A,"Despite the fact that Venus is dangerous the author gives so much information for example it lets us know how thick its atmosphere. The percent of carbon dioxide it has. The temperature, although everything is dangerous to the human body and there bad weath, erputing volanoes and string earthquakes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5a6acf8e093,D8D1FA118E4A,Instead of hiding those facts he or she adds them on making it more intresting. All the information that is being given is making you want to study it more even if it dangerous. It shows that he supports the studdying of it and knows the worth and most that goes on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17d4e1fd39e8,D8D1FA118E4A,"Last but not least the author gives information abouth the studies that have been done, it informs us about NASA and how it has the idea of sending humans to more indepthy study Venus. Although he or she talked about the great sides of Venus they included the down falls and the things that happen from earthqukes to volcanoes, to oceans to the way a human could live there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21c62915f354,D8D1FA118E4A,They bring up many facts about both showing us that they know the dangerous things. Instead of not using the negatuve stuff he or she pulls it in and uses as a strong defense and brings good things in as well. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d94c991f25da,D8D1FA118E4A,In conclousion the author is very into the study even if it dangerous and makes it intresting to read. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+13229047eec2,D8E67D87842A,Is it a natural formed face or is it made by aliens? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bcf71398bf24,D8E67D87842A,I'm a scientist telling you that it is a natural form rock. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7265e3fd4795,D8E67D87842A,"The first reason is, that we here at NASA caught an image of a face in 1976 by viking 1. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+283f28780cdd,D8E67D87842A,"At first we thought it was an alien or a face made by aliens. Then in 2001 we found the same picture of the face, but got a better veiw and a better picture quialty of the face. The picture was ten times sharper than the first one. Whe the imaged appeared on JPL web site, reavealing that is was a natural landform, not a face made by aliens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02d1570da7f8,D8E67D87842A,"There are no such thing as an alien. This was the reason why there no such things as aliens. We will be doing even more research, thank you.         ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c86520cfaafb,D8FA1F4C6D5C,I agree that students should participate with this decision ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1c77b0e190d1,D8FA1F4C6D5C,"it can be good for them, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+681eaf3feb2f,D8FA1F4C6D5C,Make them get more involved ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e9a17620c95,D8FA1F4C6D5C,its good to participate in extracurricular activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f08353d9ac1,D8FA1F4C6D5C,It can be good for them because they might enjoy it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6c9ebcb32be5,D8FA1F4C6D5C,"They would be more excited.
+
+It will make them want to do more work.
+
+Also it will show how much you care about extracurricular activities then before. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7c276f38fa68,D8FA1F4C6D5C,Make them get more involved is a amazing way to go because it has more benefits. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+114c31edfc75,D8FA1F4C6D5C,"Good options and it would change how you think.
+
+Also its wonderful to see everybody getting involved.
+
+Its good to participate in extracurricular actives because it can change their attitude for the better ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+917807e98871,D8FA1F4C6D5C,Extracurricular activities are good to participate in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a986479985d2,D8FA1F4C6D5C,"So I think everyone would like to participate, and even if they don't want to they might enjoy it as well as the next person. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+679d970e5bf7,D8FA1F4C6D5C,"I think it can be good for them, make them get more involved, and good to participate in extracurricular activities, are all great ways of showing how students should participate. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+29ff27351075,D933F289955E,"In the short story "" The Challenger of Exploring Venus,"" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite it many dangers ",Position,Adequate,,,
+85e051930003,D933F289955E,"in paragraph 4 the author states that Venus is ""a sister planet,"" and also"" astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74bf31408f6e,D933F289955E,The author is worthy os studying venus because venus is a planet were there could mostlikly have human on the planet ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ae49b7542274,D933F289955E,"with the new electronis NASA are trying to use to start studying Venus could help. stated in paragraph 7 ""NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chais of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions"" is showing readers that even with the dangers getting
+
+Venus to be a planet with living things and people could possibly happen in the long run. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0465cf52608a,D933F289955E,Also even if there is dangerous ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d329bde5a117,D933F289955E,"human curiosity can always over power the dangerous, ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ca3bbd9d3c3c,D933F289955E,"all the insight ,and electronics being tested to go there with no problem can expand our imaginations,and innovations. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b05b29578ba5,D933F289955E,"The author was trying to explain that "" Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts"". ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c042a65450da,D994B051E6A2,To inform fellow citizens about advantages of limiting car usage you would have to tell them everything ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+614e8804721d,D994B051E6A2,"Like how residents from Germany upscale community are suburban pioneers and they have given up their car's. Street parkng, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in there district. Why is this forbidden? i just don't get it. Car owners buy there own space, for $40,000 along with there home. In Europe passenger cars are reponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States.
+
+In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting car reduced. Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new federal. So fellow citizens should help them out with there limiting car usage. they sure have a lot going on. Like in the end of car culture. There expanses and suburban ideals had long been one of the world's prime car ciltures. But American's love affatr with its vehicles seems to be cooling. Its seens like they don't mind.
+
+If i was a big huge fellow citizen i would help out with what there going throuh because i don't think this is right. For them to be having to pay so much more then what we have to pay is not cool. What would we do without car's we can't walk everywhere. That wouldnt be right. They say te day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid 1990s. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fff2b6685b4,D994B051E6A2,What about if it was raining how are we suppsoed to get to work or get food. we need a car to get to places. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7513cd08f090,D994B051E6A2,They say the rain hasn't stopped people from participating. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e79ee60e12e4,D994B051E6A2,But i think it has stopped them. Therefore we need are cars to get to where we need to be.      ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+923cfa52f094,D99A8FDB17D8,"Some schools require its students to complete summer assignments, this raises the question of whether these projects should be teacher-designed or students-designed? Which would be more beneficial to both the educator and the learner? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+22cce8bbad39,D99A8FDB17D8,Students would better benefit from completing an assignment structured by teachers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dbed8dc7d9c3,D99A8FDB17D8,they have received an education on how to teach adolescents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+727192c343be,D99A8FDB17D8,understand where a student needs to be in their learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6352aabac24e,D99A8FDB17D8,allow the individual to explore a subject that they previously didn't know about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9b9c65a7e7f,D99A8FDB17D8,the teachers have been educated on student learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f8a65d08d59,D99A8FDB17D8,"Before even being able to become an educator, teachers have to complete an education of their own; where they learn the most beneficial way to help another person understand something. Compared to an adolescent, who most likely isn't thinking the same way, it is clear that one will have much more success than the other in getting the lesson through. One is focused on how to get the point across as efficiently as possible and the other simply doesn't have the same thought process. The vigorous work done to obtain a teaching degree also ensure that those who are taught under the educator are not put in a stressful situation, learn at a comfortable speed, and are challenged just enough. Proving that teacher-designed assignments guarantee not only that the individual is learning, but learning effectively. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86e992713427,D99A8FDB17D8,the teacher better understands where a students is in their learning and where they should be by what time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f00b948f8d4e,D99A8FDB17D8,"more experienced educators have seen quite a lot of different students with different learning patters and know how to manipulate that to the benefit of the student and themselves. This trait is most useful in a situation that the students in a class are in completely different areas in their understanding. The teacher is then able to build projects that are unique to each individual's strengths and weaknesses. Which consequently allows the class to collectively reach the same high level of understanding, all while working individually. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24d53ce64ed4,D99A8FDB17D8,It is impossible for a student to design an project about a topic that they dont' already know about. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74befccb68b9,D99A8FDB17D8,Teachers should be the one's structuring the summer assignment because they are able to give the learner an unknown topic that could even possibly interest them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2908a86fd49c,D99A8FDB17D8,Although one could argue that student-designed summer assignment have their own benefits ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+ce092de54edf,D99A8FDB17D8,"the better option are teacher-designed assignments. These summer projects are better structured because the teachers have received and education on how to teach adolescents, they understand where a student needs to be in their learning, and allow the individual to explore a subject that they previously didn't know about. This structure is also beneficial because it doesn't allow the student to create anything that isn't challenging and even makes it easier on the teacher with grading. For these reasons, summer assignments should be designed by teachers and not the students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+344b4c76915d,D9A50E9D3E5A,In the story the author is talking about have Venuse is Earth sister and how Venuse may have had life form on it ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ac2e747fbf5a,D9A50E9D3E5A,Venuse is a posible living place ,Position,Adequate,,,
+993f1058e423,D9A50E9D3E5A,NASA need to do more resurch on Venuse but it is hard to do when Venuse has only been bored a few times and its hard to see through a scope. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+816395f83bc7,D9A50E9D3E5A,"Venuse is known as the ""Evening Stars because it is just a dot in the lends. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+61e15bfe8b8c,D9A50E9D3E5A,Besides the sun Venuse is one of the brightest pionts in the sky. The planet Venuse my have once been like our own lively. No this planet that we call our sister is just filled with dusty mountains abd vallies. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67abd4e88c19,D9A50E9D3E5A,NASA is tring to find out more information about Venuse ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a761812ce816,D9A50E9D3E5A,"Because NASA is truying to find a way to give Venuse back life. NASA is not only trying to give Venuse back life, but also to see weather it is living grounds. In order to make sure Venuse is the right planet to give life to NASA has to find out the presure and the oxigen levels. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0272c1022d7f,D9A50E9D3E5A,In conclusion NASA is trying to find ways to make othere planets our home because Earth is falling apart. Venuse is our next step to a new home. NASA is trying to find a way to make Venuse our new home. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66320fd2f658,DA0FBE6F11C9,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+819b1a72f478,DA0FBE6F11C9,The projects assigned to the students during the summer should be designed by teachers ,Position,Effective,,,
+f4a88ae164ec,DA0FBE6F11C9,Teachers know all the requirements that a student needs to excel in their class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+17901b61bf9e,DA0FBE6F11C9,If a student designs the project he or she will make it to the ability where it is easy on them instead of actually learning from the project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b07b30e8cba9,DA0FBE6F11C9,"
+Every year many teachers have lesson plans that they go by to get their students to the requirements needed to pass their class. When a teacher assigns a project during the summer it is to prepare the student for the upcoming year. A teacher designs the project in a certain way where the student can obtain information during the summer instead of forgetting it completely. For example, a history teacher assigns a summer project every year. He assigns it so his students can be prepared for the first lesson that he is going to go over. He wants his students to have background information about the material for better understanding. The project could actually be very helpful because instead of going into the class not knowing anything at all a student can at least go with the information he or she learned from doing the summer project ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8baeb39f4126,DA0FBE6F11C9,The projects designed by the teachers in the summer are to help a students achieve great things in their class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b1689ba20e8a,DA0FBE6F11C9,"If a student was able to design his or her own summer project, it will probably lead to them not getting any information from it at all. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f899987cb37e,DA0FBE6F11C9,"A student does not know all the requirements needed for their upcoming class. The student will probably create the project where it is less work on themselves. Not many students want to do work during their summer break. Many students already do not even want a summer project assigned. I had a chance to create my own project during the summer one year for my English class; it did not turn out very well. I created the project where I did not have to do a ton of work on it because it was my summer break, and I wanted to enjoy it. The reason why it did not turn out well because I created the project with not enough for information because I did not want to waste my time on a summer project. Which also leaded to me not learning anything from it at all. When the first day of class came I knew absolutely nothing that my teacher was talking about. Then realized If my teacher had created the summer project I feel like I would of obtained way more information because she knows all the goals that need to be reached to succeed in her class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c24819d00270,DA0FBE6F11C9,Many students believe that they should be able to design their own summer projects because they feel like they should have a chance to assign themselves something that they are actually interested in ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b6bfb1790f91,DA0FBE6F11C9,"However, it is better for a teacher to design the summer project because the teacher knows all the information that a student needs to be successful in their class. It is better for a student to have information about what they actually need to know to pass the class than something that just interests them.  ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+02f6676b06ac,DA3D494E63E4,"NASA is over reacting over this face on mars because they think aleins did it, they been taking alot of photos, and they been showing it to the public. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b8be2b08ce15,DA3D494E63E4,NASA should stop this because it could be just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+840654bffab3,DA3D494E63E4,NASA thinks aliens made the face because it looks like a face. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ce4ffbb0a509,DA3D494E63E4,Studys show that it could be a natural landform like a butte or a mesa just like we have on planet Earth. NASA argues that aliens could be hiding their markings behind a haze. Critics argue that it could be a natural landform. NASA took a photo of the face and it appeared to look like a butte or mesa. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05d5b71106ae,DA3D494E63E4,NASA should stop taking photos of the face because they already have enough pictures of the face to look at. In 1976 the took a photo of the face by using Viking 1. Nasa argues that they can get better views when take new photos. critics argue that you dont need that much of photos to figure out what the face is. In 2001 they used the Viking to take a photo of the face and they got back a good photo. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+064c4eca52f4,DA3D494E63E4,It showed that it was a natural landform and it looked like a butte or a mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80f085bd4f63,DA3D494E63E4,"NASA should stop showing it to the public because they know what the face is, and people dont need to worry about it. The face starred in a Hollywood film, and appeared in books. NASA argues that they need to get the information out to people. Critics argue that people dont need to worry about it and get freaked out about it. The face was on talk shows, checkout lines for 25 years, and in magazines. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+095afdc87cbd,DA3D494E63E4,"This shows that the face was out in the public for people to see. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ce68cd1818c4,DA3D494E63E4,"In conclusion NASA is over reacting over this face on mars because they think aliens did it, they been taking alot of photos, and they been showing it to the public. I think NASA should stop taking photos and reasearching the face because its a butte or a mesa.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+148450a999a2,DA44340727CE,"Today I was having an agument with my buddy. This argument was about ""The Face on Mars"". We both had our own opinions on what we thought it was. We weere sitting in my living room on the tan couch with the television on. My friend was tall with blonde hair and skinny. I had brown hair and was average height. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bf97a3da1bc1,DA44340727CE,I worked for Nasa so I had seen pictures of what it was and had proof that it was only a mesa and it was an illusion to the human eye. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+53a70a6ee7a0,DA44340727CE,Zeke thought it was an artifact on once living life on Mars. He thought Nasa was going to say it was something else so people wouldn't truly know what it was. He thought Nasa was trying to keep it in the dark so noone would try and travel there to get closer looks on it and steal there idea. Zeke thought we needed to run further studies to truely figure out what this was. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+73d60949c7bc,DA44340727CE,I told Zeke that it was only a landform on Mars and not some alien artifact. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67b85be7255f,DA44340727CE,I told him that it was a mesa which was common in this area of Mars. I also explained how shadows made it look like a face and how it was all an illusion that was visible to the human eye. They said that this landform was nothing more than a landorm on Mars that wasnt what it had appered to be. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1522c1f5363d,DA44340727CE,"Zeke, who was a man of what he said, did not believe me and wouldn't take my word for it. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+18e93e467786,DA44340727CE,Once he got an idea in his head it wasn't going to move for anything. It did not matter what proof you showed him he wouldn't believe as single word. He argued with me about if or hours until finally we decided that we wouldn't argue about it anymore. He still told me he thought his idea was right and I was completly wrong. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c62def499f97,DA44340727CE,I told Zeke i worked for Nasa so I would know way more than he does an I insured him it was not an alien artifact and it was just a mesa which looked to be something it wasn't and that he shouldn't be so stubborn about it and just believe me. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2ecfdf1b2351,DA44340727CE,Knowing Zeke I didn't thnk he would even budge. Of course i was right and Zeke didn't sway his answer at all. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce9ee53e3a39,DA44340727CE,I offered to show him prove. I had pictures of the event and so I showed him. He finally could see what we saw. He decided that he needed to look closer into the pictures. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c4917de2387,DA44340727CE,"He gave me back the pictures and he said ""You know I think those pictures didn't help change my mind at all""   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+727639f31b4d,DA5E92093978,"In the passage ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" by Nick D'Alto. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2513463e9b37,DA5E92093978,I belive that the new technology the Facial Action Coding System is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a40ea3c16f50,DA5E92093978,It could help in schools by helping you not be so bored and confused. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74a4b6dba363,DA5E92093978,"Also, it could help you tell how your friends are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+458000f4c701,DA5E92093978,This technology could be what schools need to keep their students awake and interacting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+510301deddd6,DA5E92093978,"In the passage Dr. Huang says "" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"". If a computer could predict when a student was bored or confused and do something to change that it would change the amount of people who actually learn something drastically. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b7692cc004f8,DA5E92093978,The software can help get rid of unwanted ads that annoy you and bring up the ones you like by something so simple. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3a8bf91e10c5,DA5E92093978,"In the passage it says"" If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similiar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different."" With the new software doing that it would save alot of frustration from having to click the x button on all the ads that you dont care for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e89be8c0be3,DA5E92093978,"WIth the new technology it i that it is a benefit to our generation. All of the old paintings that we could look at and tell the mood, history teachers would have a field day. I belive that the new technology the Facial Action Coding System is valuable ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1a2686f110a8,DA6449D7D94A,"I must say that, in my opinion The Face on Mars is indeed NOT created by aliens. It is simply illogical. ",Position,Effective,,,
+455034eeb043,DA6449D7D94A,"Firstly, the picture taken in 2001 is solid proof, as well as the 1998 picture. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6dfb83e812e8,DA6449D7D94A,"Both seem to resemble a simple mesa, a natural landform quite common on Mars. The 1998 photograph was slightly blurry, so three years later Michael Malin and his crew returned to the Red Planet, to the Cydonia region. Mr. Malin set the Mars Global Surveyor camera to maximum resolution, and snapped an excellent picture from above the Face. And, going even further, I will point out that each pixel in the 2001 photograph spans1.56 meters, as the Viking I's 1976 photo spans 43 meters per pixel. As you can see, this is a significant difference and must not be overlooked. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d976364c7a64,DA6449D7D94A,"Also, I will point out that, in 1976, we at NASA were still relatively new to venturing beyond Earth's orbit. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a56c2ecffa0d,DA6449D7D94A,"The Apollo 11 mission was just seven years old! To attach a high-powered camera to a space shuttle was very challenging at the time. I still hold to my belief that, during the 1976 mission, it was either the fault of the Viking I for holding a bad angle for the camera and causing blurriness, or the camera's fault for simply not being powerful enough. The 1976 photo spans just 43 meters per pixel, which at the time was a very high resolution, but now is considered very low. All in all, the Viking I photo of the Face on Mars is forty years old and must not be taken as seriously as it once was. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1e9e295b8837,DA6449D7D94A,"My final claim that the Face on Mars is a mesa lies in the fact that, if the Face really was an alien monument, NASA would not keep their lips tight about it. It would make global headlines, and shock the world. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9d17d591528,DA6449D7D94A,"I find it highly unrealistic that NASA would even have been able to determine what the Face was forty years ago, much less hiding a discovery of extra-terrestrial life that could make a huge profit for the space program. And, had NASA really claimed that the Face was an object built by otherworldly life, surely someone would let the cat out of the bag. Not to mention that, if the vast majority of NASA believed it was an alien monument, do you really think that they would wait eighteen years to investigate the subject again? On top of all of this, it's simply illogical that aliens would create such a thing. As far as we all know, the supposed ""aliens"" on Mars have never come in contact with a human, much less seen one. That only leaves possible explanation; aliens created a monument that of which coincedentally resembles a human head. An absolute coincedence. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+adf195daeaf3,DA6449D7D94A,"Are you ready to accept the truth about the Face on Mars? I have listed valid, credible arguments including the high resolution of the 2001 photo, and the weak resolution of the 1976 photo. I also questioned the logic of extra-terrestrial life, and the logic that NASA would have used to cope with the discovery of aliens. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d651dcc813ba,DA8115F12B50,"Everyday a great many people drive their cars to commute to work, run errands, and sometimes drive their cars for career related purposes. Little do they know that the greenhouse gas emissions that their automobiles create are damaging the environment and creating large amounts of pollution in metropolitan areas. To help reduce the gas emmisions caused by automobiles many countries around the world have created programs and communities that are designed to lessen the amount of car usage in the areas that they are employed in ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f3d16ca346b6,DA8115F12B50,reduced the amount of greenhouse gasses in Earth's atmosphere ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+acd9b4364b4a,DA8115F12B50,producing many other benefits. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cae9cbba7e28,DA8115F12B50,Of all the advantages of limited car usage the most attractive one would definetly have to be reduced pollution and greenhouse gas emissions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7624900c42ce,DA8115F12B50,"Not only will people save money on fuel in communities that forbid the usage of cars but they will save the planet as well. According to the article ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"" by Elisabeth Rosenthal ""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhous gas emissions in Europe ... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States."" The information shows that a large amount of gas emissions can be produced by automobiles. Assume that there were a lot of cities that had incredibly low rates of car usage. If those city's greenhose gas emission levels were compared to those of an average car filled city then it would be logical that the car-free city produced less greenhouse gasses. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f34720cfbd0,DA8115F12B50,Another positive change that has the ability to happen in cities and communities that limit their car usage is that municipal development can occur ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1e2536a3e60,DA8115F12B50,"When people start to use cars less and less then businesses would most likely move to more accessable locations which in turn may give the businesses more customers. Due to the increased business in certain stores, stores from different companies will likely move in to areas in and around the one the other businesses reside in to drum up their sales as well. The article ""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"" supports my statement in the with the sentence, ""Parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up."" The sentence shows the correlation between lessening car usage and municipal development. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9f007379d42,DA8115F12B50,"In the end, the advantages of limiting car usage are as bountiful as fish in the ocean. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+72b21c557200,DA8115F12B50,"From lessening the amount of pollution in cities to aiding the development of cities, limiting car usage can do great things.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+217010dd141d,DA8C8A4E3A3E,"NASA has discovered many incredible supernatural things, but they do not believe any of these situations was caused by the existance of aliens ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+08d34a2074dd,DA8C8A4E3A3E,I do not believe that the Face was caused by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8309df776e0a,DA8C8A4E3A3E,"First of all, the Face does not signify a statue or proof of alien existance. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f7ceabba8a7,DA8C8A4E3A3E,"In paragraph 7, the text clearly states, "" There was no alien monument after all.""
+
+This means that aliens could not have created the Face as a signification or monument to proof thier existance. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6c9c66bc086,DA8C8A4E3A3E,"Second, the Face is a landform. The Face looks more a landform that could have caused by the harsh weather on Mars ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fdc7f17d084,DA8C8A4E3A3E,"In paragraph 12, the text clearly states,""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms that are common around the American West."" The author also states in the text,"" It reminds me mostly of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho."" This means that the Face was a landforms caused by its location on Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79f13a7e1afa,DA8C8A4E3A3E,CA: Aliens could have made the Face as a siblimal message. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+df010c205bcf,DA8C8A4E3A3E,They could not have because there is not any evidence that aliens did it ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+747c54b3ca9c,DA8C8A4E3A3E,The Face is in the north part of Mars and that is a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d05414c12688,DA8C8A4E3A3E,"In conclusion, aliens did not cause the Face on Mars because it is a land form caused by the weather on Mars. If aliens caused the Face on Mars it could have a been more evidence of their existance, and the Face would not look more of a landform. Otherwise, I do not believe the face was caused by aliens, more so of a landform.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+47a81b8842d3,DAA0F90A5C8F,"Vennus is evaning star and has a bright point of light in the sky. The nikname that is for it is misleading that venus is a planet,the second planet from are sun. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dd96a0c0fa9d,DAA0F90A5C8F,It has been proved yhat it is challeng a place to be examine closely ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dadaf43674de,DAA0F90A5C8F,"Venus a friend to earth and the closest to earth than any other planet. The density ,size are mostly the same, Venus,Mars is earth neightbor, orbit the sun at different,hottest planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4af18207d5be,DAA0F90A5C8F,"Previous missions that were unmaned by the spacecraft was issue why it's one spaceships touch on venus in more than a decades. Challeging for humans to study planets. Atmousphere is thick almost 97 percent carbon deoxcide blankets venus. The planet surface tempertures rase averageover 800 degrees Fahrenhit,pressure is 90 times greater than what humans seen, that amount of pessure would crush a submarine. Geology compare it to an erupting valcano ,powerful eathquak. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+526110b16b05,DAA0F90A5C8F,"Planet has a rocky surface almost as a valley and mountains , craters. National Aeronautics has one particular reason sendind humans to allow them to float above the fray. Are pressure is clost to are sea level on the earth. Peering venus is ships and hovoring over safely far above the planet so can provide limited insight. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67add19242df,DABEF78A3A24,"The author presents a strong argument suggesting a worthy pursuit to study Venus depsite dangerous endeavors, however, his statments regauarding un-reliability on current technology, the necessary actions to conduct research, and numerous failed attempts to reach Venus greatly outweigh the good outcomes of this mission. ",Position,Effective,,,
+910f8d202c7c,DABEF78A3A24,Venus is considered the planet that is most similar to Earth. The passage explained that scientist speculate if there was once life on Venus considering it incredible geographical and size similarities to earth. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d43b012aeee3,DABEF78A3A24,"Although further research could test their theories, Venus has very extreme weather conditions harmul to man and other objects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffe7cb9aaecb,DABEF78A3A24,A closer look and gathering of evidence is expected to make this mission a success. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9384445cfe49,DABEF78A3A24,"However, modern day technology is barely able to keep up efficiently by just the use of humans. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+539bd5f29859,DABEF78A3A24,"These issues are far too risky to consider pursuing. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+4b3f3e34ffda,DABEF78A3A24,"Venus has features such as mountains, craters, and even valleys that are also seen on Earth. According to the article, its atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide with temperatures averging 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth with can crush nearly anything that tries to reach its surface and even liquefy metals. The second paragraph discussed how spacecrafts in the past barely lasted a few hours and since there hasn't been a spacecraft sent there in more than three decades. This evidence shows that despite the success of reaching Venus, we are not even close to even slowly progressing and fixing smaller issues with spacecrafts traveling there and back to Earth. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+95f8d0a3435f,DABEF78A3A24,"By not providing evidence of some sort of pregression or steps closer to considering sending humans to Venus, the author weakens his arguments over the better outcomes of conducting research. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+965e826354d3,DABEF78A3A24,"Conducting research requires numerous forms of evidence, samples, test, etc. In paragraph 5, the author makes suggestions of creating a spacecraft to sustain temperatures of at least 170 degrees Fahrenheit and levitating thirty-plus miles over the surface to observe the planet. Although this may be the most safest and efficient approach, he even stated that it would require getting ""up close and personal"" to collect samples. The whole idea is to reach Venus and collect data to compare to Earth and Venus' previous history. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+476ec8e810d8,DABEF78A3A24,"Without being able to collect samples, the author weakens his argument to study Venus despite the dangers it presents. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bde30a9678f8,DABEF78A3A24,"Lastly, modern day technology is known for its speed and cinvenience to access information. In paragraph 7, the author discussed how electronics we simplified to last at least three weeks in simulating conditions to Venus. He explained, ""modern computers...tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physicakl conditions."" He supported this claim by informing readers that older technology, mechanical computers, have been re-evaluated and seem to have better calculations but involve levers and such. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+173c11bbfa6b,DABEF78A3A24,This weakens his argument because it would mean that this mission wouldn'tt be helpful if the right technology can't be utilized to help calculate and evalutate information. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f5cbb9f441cb,DABEF78A3A24,"All in all, the author makes very good claims as to why NASA should continue to pursue further research on Venus. It would help determine if there was previous life, if it once operated as successful as earth, and if Earth could potentially be headed in the same direction. However, the extreme weather conditions, actions necessary for research, and un-cooperative technology make this pursuit seem far less worth it considering how danger it is for humans and even the spacecrafts sent to examine the planet. Ultimately, the project can be deemed as impossible if facts given in the article remain the same.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c17ebfdcd970,DB0E754610DB,In my opinion I think that the author did a great job on sjowing the dangers of venus beause he gave a lot of information. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fe3b168814fe,DB0E754610DB,He also tells us about the name that they give venus and the way that they describe the planet. Now that I have read the passage I now know that venbus is a very dangerous planet to explore. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90e4187c4c69,DB0E754610DB,"
+In the passage the author states that Venus was the closest planet to earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+889e56ccd0a6,DB0E754610DB,"Venus was to the closest to the size and distance of the earth. It was often called earths twin. Venus was also called the Evening Star,but that nickname was very misleading since it was actually a planet. Venus is also one of the most easiest planet to spot if you are standing on earth. Although venus was the closest to the planet The author also started to notice that Mars was close to earth also. Then he started noticing that sometimes Venus was closer to Mars and sometimes Mars was closer to Earth then Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+47ef2baa6263,DB0E754610DB,Venus hasnt been explored since it is way to dangerous to be explored. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a66fbb8bc77,DB0E754610DB,"They would send ships that are unmanned,because when ever they would send people that were inside the paceship they would not survive the landing. That is the main reason why they havent landed there or try to land there in three decades. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide covers Venus. The passage states that ""Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfic acid in venus Atmosphere. On the planets surface,temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,And the Atmoshperic pressure is 90 times more greater then what we experience on our own planet"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0395966a0ee4,DB0E754610DB,Astronomers are saying that Venus may have once been been a planet like earth. I think that he did a really good job on collenting information abou venus .i hope that one day Astronomers will be able to land on Venus safely and be able to explore it. The reason is because I wonder what it is like to be on that planet. In my opinion I think that one day it will be possible to explore Venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4682976abc6d,DB1B143B6EB1,"Technology has become a large part of our daily lives. We rely on it for communitcation, information, and various different things. Now, scientist want to bring computers that can read our facial expressions into the classrooms. People believe this technology will shape our future as students and this is why they are wrong. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dd8194912911,DB1B143B6EB1,Bringing computers that read our facial expressions into classrooms is an invasion of privacy for students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ff2ec63e7d0,DB1B143B6EB1,"If a computer is able to see our expressions while we are reading articles or doing video surgery, this means that our computers are recording our every move. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aca3ec16280e,DB1B143B6EB1,"""Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements - in a real face."" This quote from the article states that our computers are watching us to see if we are pleased or unsatisfied with what we are looking at. They believe this new technology is a great idea but they do not realize people can hack into these systems. When hackers get into these systems, they can watch you and what you do, which is invasion of privacy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4457c2482c96,DB1B143B6EB1,We already have amazing technology that we use on a day to day basis. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a875039cf679,DB1B143B6EB1,"In my opinion, there is no reason why students should need a computer to read their facial expressions inside of the the classroom. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b75d06b58ad6,DB3351F815E2,"New software has been created to determine the facial expressions of students. It uses technology to give data as to what emotions someone is feeling such as happiness, sadness, and boredom. These technologies are possibly going to be used in classrooms to help students learn better based on their emotions towards the lesson that they are learning. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2b4208d8af06,DB3351F815E2,the use of software to determine the emotional expressions of students in the classroom is not valuable to the students learning experience. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0e60beac18a7,DB3351F815E2,"To start, in order for this new technology to work, students woukld have to constantly be watched by cameras that read their expressions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07624016dcf5,DB3351F815E2,"This is said in the text when it says, ""Using imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements,"" (D'Alto 4). One can see from this that the students would always have to be watched and their facial movements would all be recorded. This could be an issue of privacy for some students if they do not want to constantly be recorded. It also makes it easy for outside threats to hack this system and watch students or get personal information from the videos. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1dd5bc3e70b8,DB3351F815E2,"Emotion-recognition software can also be expensive for schools, especially since it doesnt work on normal PC computers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+05af451fc4fe,DB3351F815E2,"The text states, "" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile,"" (D'Alto 7). This shows that normal computers that students would typically use cannot support this technology, making the school buy the technology that can support it. This would be a costly job and if the school cannot pay for it then the students would have to and some families may not be able to afford it ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8adc1d5a16ee,DB3351F815E2,"Lastly, students facial expressions may not directly correlate with the emotion they are feeling towards the lesson that they are learning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d28b0e50ead3,DB3351F815E2,"This can be seen in the text when it says, "" A classroom computer could recognize when a stuent is becoming confused or bored,"" Dr Huang predicts. ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,"""" (D'Alto 6). This exemplifies that the schools want to use this technology to help students learn more effectively by using technology thats like a teacher. For some students this may cause trouble if they make facial expressions, but it's not about the lesson. Such as if a student is told something by another student and the student looks confused, the computer might see that and think they dont understand the lesson. Then it would modify the lesson for the student even if the student understood it just fine. A teacher would be much better at understanding the students emotions in a certain situation than technology. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3fbff32c602,DB3351F815E2,"Students need to be able to learn on their own and to communicate with teachers on how well they´re understanding what they´re learning. By using facial recognition technology, its taking away their communication skills. There are many flaws to the facial-expression technology that make it a bad candidate to use in schools. It´s certain that there are plenty of good uses for facial expression technology, however using it in schools is not one of them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8d53234df984,DB4AA9C5B389,I am against using the value of technology to read students' emotional expressions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+81b34bbb2f4b,DB4AA9C5B389,I'm not saying that this type of technology is bad ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8c6f1f6bfd14,DB4AA9C5B389,though it isn't good either. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+4b9ceb8fe4de,DB4AA9C5B389,"I feel like this type of technology has no purpose what so ever. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a1d7b1723ac5,DB4AA9C5B389,"In paragraph five it states that ""you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by looking at their face."" If I could do that why do I need a computer to tell me that they are happy, sad and whatever else. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c9d8c7b3eea,DB4AA9C5B389,Just by looking at the Mona Lisa painting you can tell that she is somewhat happy but also doesn't seem like she cares about being painted. Why do we need to calculate emotions to know just exactly how a person is feeling? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6745981729f6,DB4AA9C5B389,In conclusion we don't need this type of technology just to see what a person is feeling. It mostly feels like a waste of time at least to me. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+13fe5ce3e515,DB58FD0171CD,Students would not be happy that a machine reads your face to tell a teacher how your feeling. Sometimes people want to be left alone because they are sad or mad. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8ac7a2b31c07,DB58FD0171CD,So having this machine woud not be good to have because some teacher could be nosy and ask why are you mad or sad ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7e9b3bcbeb97,DB58FD0171CD,The machine cold also tell if your lying ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c4fa46d490c,DB58FD0171CD,"Sometimes you got to lie, so you could be left alone ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5da9cfc02ce6,DB58FD0171CD,"Students would probably skip school because of this machine. Lots of schools will be empty because students do not want teachers to know about them. This machine could be used in pictures or face portates to see how the person in the picture is feeling, but to use it on students then no. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc642b27475d,DB58FD0171CD,The police could use this machine to find out if criminals are lying about what they did. Parents would also be mad that teachers are using the machine on their children ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d43d45606fd,DB58FD0171CD,There is no point of teachers using this machine ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8bb9de4b40d,DB58FD0171CD,They do not need to know how your feeling at all. The teacher only us it for a reason or when nessasary not when they just feel like it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d4944b35139,DBB077A0818A,"People shouldn't be able to use phone while they're driving, but at the same time people need their phone in case of an emergency. Or if their job requires using their phone and driving at the same time they'll have to use their phone ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c45609f4ca77,DBB077A0818A,Everyone knows the law that says that you can't use your phone while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c274ef9f049b,DBB077A0818A,"Some of the reasons law enforcement say that is because they're plenty of incidents like car accidents or someone getting hit or running a red life. Those reasons could put your life or someone else's life at risk. If you need to use your phone, mostly for emergency purposes, you should pull over on the side of the road and their will me no lives at risk. Many people in the world, including teens, have been badly injured or killed from accidents because either them or the other driver were using their phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bdb9690a050c,DBB077A0818A,On the other hand some people in the world are going to have to use their phones as a job. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+69ad1fc320b3,DBB077A0818A,"For example, ubers and lyfts. People that do that as a job are going to have to use their phones to use their GPS to find the person that they are picking up from there location. But that goes for anybody that is traveling to places that they haven't heard of before or haven't been there in a while and forgot their ways on how to get there. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebc317f652ce,DBB077A0818A,"
+People should be able to use their phones while their driving, but at the same time they should not be able to use their phone at all. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c266823921ea,DBB077A0818A,So what the law enforcements should do is that they should event some type of bumper sticker that people could put on their cars so that they should use their phone for certain purposes only. That should help the driving more safe at least. That should cause less accidents in the world. The only way to get those bumper stickers is that you have to have a job that requires you to use your phone. You're going to have to show proof that you are doing that job. Hopefully they will make this a law and the world will be a better place.   ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5afbbf00970,DBBF3EF47E93,"""What are some advantages of limiting car usage? ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+84e556c8f554,DBBF3EF47E93,losing stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb3bcde48ee9,DBBF3EF47E93,relaxing ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+13d442e138e2,DBBF3EF47E93,helping the envoriment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8174f8e7bbc7,DBBF3EF47E93,"Want to know an of advantage of limiting car usage? Well heres one, as said in source number 3 paragraph 24 ""Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution, said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with hus wife. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cedcf6199a98,DBBF3EF47E93,It says that when not usuing a car you can loose stress just by riding a bike because its less traffic and stuff. So when you dont use a car you can loose stress. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5227cf6f8b41,DBBF3EF47E93,"But thats not just the only advantage, theres more! another advantage is that it can make you relax as well because then you would be able to spend more ""family"" time and some ""you"" time because you wont have to worry about  going to places if you cant use your car ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bb8ade9d219,DBBF3EF47E93,Ands thats relaxing because theres nothing better to then to be with your family having fun relaxing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f37564c27045,DBBF3EF47E93,"But that not it! the most advange to this topic is that your helping the envoriment! why you may ask? well like as said in source 3 paragraph 24 "" Its a good opportunity to take away lower air pollution"" thats some evidence i found because has  Carlos Arturo Plaza was riding his bike thats what he said. So he said bascilly that when you use a car your polluting the environment but when you done use a car then not polluting th environment is a advange ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6d6738316869,DBBF3EF47E93,"So therefore helping your environment is a advange to this topic, and the most important one! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0038cf81cd9,DBBF3EF47E93,"So you wanted to know some advangaes tolimiting car usage? Well you got your answer. i had give 3 reasons to you have some advanages for limiting car usage. As loosing stress,relaxing,and helping the enviroment, these are some great atvanges but theres many more. I just didnt want to list more because i though i would bored you to death! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+47b9e30a1b59,DC02852088A0,"Should America really go out without the common everyday use of cars as transportation? Just think; which is more convenient? For some people, walking may do it... ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+88e107e69647,DC02852088A0,but there would be much difficulty without the utilization of cars during this modern era. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5ea2c6cbc874,DC02852088A0,"In
+
+German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars by Elisabeth Rosenthal, it is claimed that in VAUBAN, Germany, residents have given up their use of cars.
+
+""All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have no change,"" said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation for America. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ac2bd217e88,DC02852088A0,"Cars are, without a doubt the fastest means of transportation from street-to-highway; and very convenient in more ways than one. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c332ec093b1,DC02852088A0,"Sure, it may be alright to walk whenever you may feel to ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+739458e85875,DC02852088A0,but how will you be able to get to work faster if your job is many miles away? It surely will tire you out by then. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ab0336d78bb4,DC02852088A0,"
+In
+
+Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog, forces have banned cars from common usage and ordered the residents to leave their cars at home or suffer a $31 fine.
+
+""Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d445ee31526,DC02852088A0,This lets me know that many people disagree with the idea of not being able to have their own cars within their reach ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ccdae07ed05,DC02852088A0,"In certain weather conditions, such as the cold, harsh winter, just the thought of traveling on a bicycle or walking does not do any good for us! And in the summer when the humidity conditions are so high and hot, we would be too exhausted to move a muscle and refuse to walk any more than what is the seven-eleven down the block from us. In addition, you can carry many personal belongings in the comfort of your car -- which is much simpler than having to stand on your legs or tire them out from excessive bicycle-riding, along with having to deal with five bags of groceries filling your hands. When convenience comes to us, it's a good idea not to reject that opportunity. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9b4e9a3a09c,DC02852088A0,"
+The End of Car Culture
+
+(also by Elisabeth Rosenthal) it is discussed that President Obama agrees with the abomination of car transportation. The opposing argument may say,
+
+""
+
+Observations show that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009..."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+826d727e0da3,DC02852088A0,"But I can certainly disagree and state that not only is transpotation through cars a great way to get around, but it's also entertaining. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fcbfbee8de23,DC02852088A0,"In the car, you can listen to the radio, whether its news or listening to music on the way back home from work, (which is sometimes stressful.) Atleast you know you'll be sitting in your car comfortably, while listening to music. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71246fafa2fe,DC02852088A0,"Also, traffic jams may be problematic; but for some people, the overpopulation of many people being crammed up into your personal space in the outside air may be a real pain. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+71b6a9f39d21,DC02852088A0,Even excessive crowdedness that occurs on the bus may very well be a daily struggle for people who dislike crowds. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8fdf3d6355e4,DC02852088A0,"Cars will only continue to grow in a positive way in the future, and I believe that is something our past has brought to us, and only for the good of it. So why not use it? Driving is better than walking/bike riding. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cbc5b40cfab0,DC02852088A0,"We shouldn't be working our way backward, but looking to our future, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+78e1175c03a5,DC02852088A0,"and that calls for the better and more advanced technology that the people have brought to us, that our nation shall continue only to improve--and cars would be one of them.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+613ae76eee5c,DC4E11A259D8,"In 'The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author gives suggestions as to why studying Venus is a worthy persuit because of the little details as to how Venus carries a great amount as to how scientists can study to bring actual life to that planet. However, along it comes some safety hazards like extreme temperatures and high gasses in the atmosphere. I can see as to why might Venus be so similar to Earth. Venus is ""often referred to as Earth's ""twin"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" If having a planet that similar to a living planet why wouldn't we do everything in our power to make a planet that is very much the same as ours. Science has been evolving a lot over the years and I'm pretty sure that with all the technology and theories scientist have came up with them being able to have a study to plan out how to bring life to Venus would probably work at and greater and more things coulud also come along with it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ab3b40546ecf,DC4E11A259D8,The author does a good job of these statements because they give some examples to both sides as to why or why not there should be a study on life on Venus. The author seem to have thrown in a few claims to create an arguement for both sides if its a good idea or not. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b50de619d83c,DC4E11A259D8,I have two exampes as to why sending Scientist off in to space would be a bad idea. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce00e34eb1aa,DC4E11A259D8,"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" Having that said if we send them off into Venus it would be a problem because they would'n't have any time to experiment and do research up there since theres been problems with the spaceship not being able to survive. ""the planets surface, tmeperatures aveerage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than waht we experience on our own planet."" The material they use would have to be the problem as to why the spaceship doesnt seem to last long. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+256fbcbde66f,DC4E11A259D8,On the other hand I also agree on having this study happen and here's why. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95e227c7c725,DC4E11A259D8,"There's research on from the past that from long ago ""Venus was probably coverd largely with oceans and could have supported various froms of life, just like Earth."" There's other features that Venus similar to earth. ""The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b081af31479,DC4E11A259D8,"In addition, NASA has came up with an idea on how to send the scientists that are willing to study for life on Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a018182942c9,DC4E11A259D8,"""NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d744a5bea1be,DC4E11A259D8,In conclusion these were my claims as to how the author stated that the study of life on Venus should or should not happen.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f2f5cc1bb90a,DC5BBE514ECE,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"", the author is presenting and explaining the new technology that has been made on human an computer communication. In the article he talks about technology that has been created to alter the learning curve in our new generations children ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d8335e8e97c5,DC5BBE514ECE,"The new technology could completely change the way that our new generation learns. By taking a little movement in your face and mathematical putting your face into numbers. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6d58a5f0ee2,DC5BBE514ECE,"For example, in paragraph six the author says, ""for example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow"". The author tells how this new face decoder could change your learning path by choosing if you should slow down because your confused, or keep up if you follow with a lesson ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d3a97e49305,DC5BBE514ECE,The author is just supporting the claim that this new technology should belong in a classroom. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+956733a27456,DC5BBE514ECE,"The author supports bhis claim once again in the first paragraph he says ""she's 83 percent happy,9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry."" The technology the author has been talking about this whole time just put Leonardo da Vinci's painting Mona LIsa face into one and zeros. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+afc34a622b5a,DC5BBE514ECE,If this incredible machine can help our youth than I think everyone should agree on it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e14c2c8613f2,DC5BBE514ECE,The new technology the author talks about is the best helping hand to students. The computer could be the student own personal tutor. This is a revolutionary turn on the eduacation of students. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1e362daae3c,DC5BBE514ECE,The author also talks about testing the reader in this article by making you make a smiling face in paragraph seven and testing if you felt happier just by making the facial expression. By just tensing up the muscles for an facial expression can actually give the expressions of the facial movement. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0159e928a46,DC5BBE514ECE,The article gives plenty of prove to show that the machine could be a benefit to are students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+79690e2e398c,DC5BBE514ECE,the article points are clear and strongly backed behind. The gives every expression that his new technology is good. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+10cf0aa3c295,DC83F2FC879B,I belive thate the face is just a natural landform becouse of facts ,Position,Adequate,,,
+435162efed33,DC83F2FC879B,One exaple of why i belive its just a natural landform is in the text it states on april 5th 1998 mars global surveyor flew over cydonia and snapped a photo ten times sharper than the original viking photos revealing a narural landform. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12036d5cb0e1,DC83F2FC879B,Another reson is in the text it states on april 8 2001 a cloudless summer day in cydonia mars global surveyor frew close enough for a second look. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6d6789754bd2,DC83F2FC879B,Another exaple of why i belive its just a natural landform is in the text it stats thate they had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the field of view. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4882b227bf8,DC83F2FC879B,In the text it also stats thate malins team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras absolut maximum resolution. In the text it also stats each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo. In the text it also statses that it is equivalent of a landform common around the american west. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46931aead342,DC83F2FC879B,I would understand why somone would belive it was not a natural landform. one reson they may not is in the text it stats it was winter in april 98 it was clooudy time of year on the red planit. In the text it also stats that some pepoul belived aliens marking where hidden by haze. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+564ca8508b8f,DC83F2FC879B,And so becouse of facts such as it being equivalint to a landform commen around the american west i belive it is not alins. so i hope this proves thate the face is just a natural landform.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e179771afef6,DCABFA6AD5AE,"Summers can be the best times of a students life. They get a break from the stress and anxiety of school and they are allowed to do any and all things they wish to do within the legal limits. Summer projects are designed to keep students engaged and learning. This can be a very good thing as long as the project is based on a topic that the student actually enjoys and will be motivated to complete. Students struggle staying engaged enough during the school year, adding a project during the time they are meant to go be kids should be handled very carefully. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+cc4739e22471,DCABFA6AD5AE,If they want the projects to be successful they must set a broad topic and allow the students to chose anything they want under that umbrella topic. ,Position,Effective,,,
+275e10f39318,DCABFA6AD5AE,"Students will enjoy doing a project about a certain YouTube creator they have fun watching, a sports team they love, or even their favorite book they read during school or over summer break. These projects should not be based around a Shakespeare play that they struggle to even read let alone comprehend. Summer projects are a good idea as long as they are handled well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccfc93e1a98e,DCABFA6AD5AE,Learning is very important and having the project is a good idea. The students must be able to choose exactly what they want to do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+faa972bc798f,DCABFA6AD5AE,This will keep them interested in the project which will make all the grades of the projects go up compared to if it was a topic they have no interest in. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6873441251000,DCABFA6AD5AE,"The students will use more of their time to perfect the project instead of waiting until the last weekend and just turning it in because they do not care about the topic and do not want to waste their time on something that has no impact on their future as soon as they finish the next test they have on the topic. Allowing the students to pick and choose their topic will help them learn about their team, person, idea, etc. without making them feel the stress and anxiety of a teacher assigned school project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efc60db93100,DCABFA6AD5AE,Projects picked by a student may even result in more knowledge being gained than a teacher assigned project. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c11542800fdf,DCABFA6AD5AE,"Students could focus on a sports team and how they network their team to different audiences in different ways. For example, mascots are normally focused on the younger audience. Teams almost always have a promotion for the first certain number of people that arrive. The first one thousand people to go through the security gates get a free t-shirt or the first fifty fans to arrive get a jersey. Marketing and understanding how to focus products to a certain group of people is so important. My dream school, Virginia Tech, has promotions every basketball game that if the opposing team misses two free throws in a row the entire crowd gets a voucher for free bacon. This encourages all Hokie fans to be as loud as possible to mess with the mental mindset of the opposing teams shooter. A majority of jobs and careers that are pursued must have a way of marketing or selling their product so this is a very important skill for kids to have that they would not other wise be able to understand if they had to read a Shakespeare book followed by a five pager paper. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fae60a16b48a,DCABFA6AD5AE,Having a teacher assigned project does have an upside ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c4db0e05b28e,DCABFA6AD5AE,"This will give the students structure and something to base their project on instead of having all the options in the world and not being able to choose one. In school, students are normally more prepared if it is a topic they have been learning about and have background knowledge on compared to a project half way through a topic, or even towards the beginning. If students are given a short book or even a PowerPoint on the topic at hand they will be more successful in completing their project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+700d2135e5ef,DCABFA6AD5AE,A student lead project during the summer is a great thing it keeps the mind or a student engaged with out boring them. Students can research any and all topics they would like so that they enjoy keeping their brain working and focused on bettering themselves. Teacher based projects will give the students structure but will leave them feeling not engaged because the topic is not something they will necessarily enjoy. The idea of a student based project is a good idea and should be created to help the minds and bodies of the students.                                ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fd191ca53624,DCC03D6E1A60,"Disagree, There are many reasons that we many not be able to go and do extracurricular activities ",Position,Adequate,,,
+93fd1c4f79d6,DCC03D6E1A60,we could not have the time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa2aef459550,DCC03D6E1A60,they should respect that because we have lives to ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+771285625803,DCC03D6E1A60,so do our parent ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+544bd4713f2c,DCC03D6E1A60,Our parents may have to go to work and the only time they can pick us up is at the end of the school day or our family can only pick us up at that time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+025833e63de2,DCC03D6E1A60,another reason is medical problems or other forms of illness. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9438f0e1add,DCC03D6E1A60,A big reason is religions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8c37b67fdcf,DCC03D6E1A60,"we could only be able to do specific thing. may we are not be able to stay so long but a lot of religions have to go to some form of temple or church to pray at a specific time. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6955842c99af,DCC03D6E1A60,There are some people who just dont like do extracurricular activities and have problems doing them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5aff59cf3b5,DCC03D6E1A60,"a lot of people need extra help with other things and making extracurricular activities mandatory is a real big struggle for them and just makes school harder. there are plenty of people dont want to, cant or struggle with them and that's not fair to make them mandatory. Why make things harder for a big group of people just so they will do extracurricular activities. there are students who like them so make them optional. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+62a150a20440,DCC03D6E1A60,Their are ways to get around the struggle of making them mandatory by making them optional or asking our teachers if we are ready for them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+34463ea0fe55,DCC03D6E1A60,We will probably do better knowing that we are being treated like an adult by giving us more freedom and more choices on there education. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51b93f43d523,DCC03D6E1A60,Why are you guys holding back on giving us educational freedom like the choice on if we do extracurricular activities. Why are you not giving us the choice on if we do extracurricular activities I can not tell you for shore but I think they dont trust the us to challenge our self to help our self to get better but I think we are capable and we want to and will If given the chance to. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5f69f64a9df9,DCDE7152B94E,"I think that fellow citizens should have the advantages to car usage, because not everyone would feel comfortable ridding around in a bus or a train with lots of other people ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+4d310e3143c6,DCDE7152B94E,But then again you have some conflicts with the environment getting all ugly and nasty . ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6b8b79c75235,DCDE7152B94E,Some people are different from others not everyone will want to go the same way meaning . They rather have their own privacy and not be on a bus or a train full of random people that might be sick with a flu or smell really nasty. Thats why 80 percent of transportation has been thruogh highways an only 20 percent to other transportation . Most of the people who intend to use train or buses don't have the right amount of money to purchase a brand new car or even a used one . The cause of that is Taxes or IRS are taking to much from the people who work to hard an theres nothing that can be done too that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02aca137ea9e,DCDE7152B94E,"This is what I don't get about how things are being done to try an save our planet called earth . If you want to try an save some thing an make it better. Don't make a expensive invention an expect people to by it like for examlpe the hybrids or plug-in cars. People can't afford many things in life because money comes an goes without out you evening knowing it . So why try to start something new when its only making more of a mess that inventers are cuasing. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97a358660dfc,DCDE7152B94E,"The way Bogota is going is the best idea that I've ever heard of they couldn't of nailed it any better . They stopped a capital city of 7 millon people from using their cars . An look at the good effects it did, new restaurants where opened an upscale shopping district haved cropped up .  The pitted an uneven sidewalks have been fixed an replaced by new smooth sidwalks. Even parks and sports centers haved also bloomed throughout the city, which is good because parents have more time an money to get their kids more actived in to sports an going out to play. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1fd6781c05c6,DCDE7152B94E,The last passage explanes what I've been saying less people are buying cars why invent new things . People are going unemployedment an things aren't going to get any better for our country . The governments are asking for to much plus you have taxes an the IRS right behind them waiting to grab your money that you worked hard for . Another thing that I don't get is why the President of the untied states can help other countries but yet can't even of seem to help his own country who is lossing more money as days go by . Whats going on up their in the white house we the people slecet you the president to run our country not others an help benfit us. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+37941760b579,DD3F7252F887,"Facial action coding sytsem should be used because it is a good way to help students and people, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1a9578304194,DD3F7252F887,First off i think if this is being used on students it is a really good idea because some students be needing help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d14c4980c30,DD3F7252F887,and they are to scared to ask for help and in this way the computer can help and make the lesson easy for the students this might give the students moure confidence of doing something and trying. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c18a1d0f940,DD3F7252F887,Also if a student is bored this will make the lesson not as boring as it is for the student. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ea83f71589d,DD3F7252F887,This is a good way to help people to what if they are going through something ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8aa392cbd5cf,DD3F7252F887,and they need help or want to talk to somebody but dont want to tell anybody the facial action coding can let somebody know and friends or family can take action ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3456d51a26e3,DD3F7252F887,"Plus it is cool because you can find out alot of things about old pictuers, Like if you want to find out or just see how somebody is feeling you can use that. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9226dba19b2d,DD3F7252F887,"This is really cool beacsue you can find out alot of feelings on just a picture. Lets talk about the Mona Lisa , they used this on her and found out how she was feeling in that painting. She was feeling happy for the most part but a little bit of other emotions with that. This is a really cool way to communicate with people, This is also a cool way to make movies and video games better and more reall felling you know.? This can sence 44 muscle in your face and will let you know how your felling just of your expression. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08af4bafc820,DD3F7252F887,We have expressions every day but sometimes can be hard to tell how we are feeling. Most people dont know how other people feel but this can let other people understand what they are going through. This can also let people track the emotion they want to know if that person is feeling. Yes i do think that this system should be used. It can help alot. This would be very useful in alot of things. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+29dd94d918f1,DDA2A181F486,I'm against this technology that reads your emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ce988a660b08,DDA2A181F486,"because I mean who really cares what other people are feeling, unless you're close to them. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+afdfffae3b51,DDA2A181F486,Some people might not want there feelings to be read because its a matter or privacy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72ed16c25f49,DDA2A181F486,"It's also just plain dumb like instead of focusing on this technology, that reads peoples emotions work on something more important ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d1a41e6bd917,DDA2A181F486,"like finding a better source of fuel, for the world thats good for us but also for nature or how to stop deforestation stuff like that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97f5f80b2c72,DDA2A181F486,But I slighlty do think this is somewhat a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+065a8b1d0d8a,DDA2A181F486,"like its says in paragraph 6 ""Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad"". For example if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown the next ad will be different ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored ""Most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communication"" noted Dr. Huang ""So computers need to understand that too ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bde9d1cd5eb5,DDA2A181F486,The only part I agree with is that it would be good for school computers to see if you had gotten confused with a certain problem that has happened and it could offer help or request help for you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc9aa189f65f,DDA2A181F486,There for I support and don't support this technology because we could use this technology for good things or just use them for dumb things like recognizing The Mona Lisas emotions like who really cares. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+25e31bb3ed52,DE01C3FDCA0A,"Driving while operating your phone can end in a very horrific way and has for a number of young adults. The number one killer of young adults is motor vehicle crashes. This is a major issue in the United States and it is shown because a law was made to prevent operating a phone and driving. For example, there are billboards everywhere saying no texting and driving and commercials saying the same. Texting and driving may seem tempting to do, but every year thousands of drivers and passengers are killed due to someone being on their phone and driving. It only takes a couple of seconds for you to take your eyes off the road and someone can swerve in your lane or you swerve in someone else's lane and didn't notice because you are texting someone back or looking at a notification. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a1adf0a48a89,DE01C3FDCA0A,"Drivers should not be able to use cell phones in any capacity while driving because in a matter of seconds you, your family or someone else's life could be put in danger or worse, taken away. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+38a76f3a5431,DE01C3FDCA0A,"First, ask yourself if the text or notification you received is more important than your life or than the people on the road with you ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dcdfa2a09bc1,DE01C3FDCA0A,"If not, put down the phone and wait until you are at a light or until you get to your destination. No notifications are worth someone's life or yours. You can look at the news or on the internet and see just how many young adults' lives are cut short because they wanted to text someone back or make a snap, all of that can wait. Seeing the statistics, the death rates, even some people's friends dead because they couldn't wait to text someone back or make a snap. Just because you got away with it once doesn't mean you should keep trying to do it because all it takes is a couple seconds and then you or someone else is hurt or dead. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd946d59b5d6,DE01C3FDCA0A,"Secondly, ""In 2018 according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration, distracted driving was involved in 2,841 motor vehicle crash fatalities. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5cfc1186e4f3,DE01C3FDCA0A,"Among those killed: 1,730 drivers, 605 passengers, 400 pedestrians and 77 bicyclists."" All these deaths could have been avoided if the person could have just waited until they stopped or until they got to their destination. Your parents tell you to text or call before you start driving for a reason so they won't lose their child or see their child hurt. ""Cell phone use behind the wheel reduces the amount of brain activity associated with driving by 37 percent."" So this shows that texting can make you forget important things you are supposed to do before or while driving. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3bd3cc3236a0,DE01C3FDCA0A,"Lastly, ""Typing text messages reduces a driver's ability to adequately direct attention to the roadway, to respond to important traffic events, and to control a vehicle within a lane and with respect to other vehicles."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8378c6cb35bf,DE01C3FDCA0A,"This shows that the couple of seconds you take to text or look at your phone can take away the attention you are required to have on the road to ensure safety. Texting while driving could make you miss that there is construction going on, someone is walking, or etc. Parents should not call while their children are driving, they should call before or after they arrive at their destination. If their child is called he is going to look at their phone and some might answer, but all it could take is a look and boom the car goes into another lane or they hit someone or another car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ea1540fc2e9,DE01C3FDCA0A,"Drivers should not be able to use cell phones in any capacity while driving because in a matter of seconds you, your family or someone else's life could be put in danger or worse, taken away. No notification is worth someone's life. You can easily take someone's life young or old by a simple text. Before you start driving, call and text everyone that needs to be called or texted and if they call or text wait until you stop or get to your destination.                      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5a648d81f720,DE20C186116A,"Mona Lisa Smiles Again
+
+Frown and smile, love and hate, but can you see a face
+
+How was Mona Lisa redone ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+702531702b37,DE20C186116A,"The simeple ancer is computers. Also, there is sicince to derturmin how female faces have change over the years. There is also talking to pefrenciles to recrate it. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+bdd2e9e9967a,DE20C186116A,"What determind this simple materpice.
+
+This was not exantly come word for work but the wrighting shows it need to be based off older pictures. There is ovisely is estmation in the pargrafe. Unfortionly but not uncommon there was some gussing.
+
+Why was the picture recoreted.
+
+The lovely picture of Mona Liisa was to make it look better. The suftware was crated for 6 different emmotions, happiness, surpise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Disiner of the sofware used was Dr. Paul Eckman. The reson why the sofware was indrectly used for this project.
+
+How was Mona Lisa redone
+
+The simeple ancer is computers. Also, there is sicince to derturmin how female faces have change over the years. There is also talking to pefrenciles to recrate it.
+
+A face is not just a picture if is a way of life. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56ef7b3079d1,DE2BFF400952,The face on mars is a natural landformation. People beleive it was made by aliens but it was not ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4cda6f5c54d7,DE2BFF400952,mars like earth has mesa's and they are huge rock formations like mountain and it was proven thanks to newer images with higher resolution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5f9cc5eb6da,DE2BFF400952,"It was first discovered by a ship called viking 1 who was taking pictures of mars to see where it's sister ship viking 2 could land and it captured The Huge Face but due to low resolution they could not make it all the way out and they believed that it was a sculpture of a egyptian pharo. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1c9f8a43bdab,DE2BFF400952,"""What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common to earth around the american midwest"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3dfb7c9a3f51,DE2BFF400952,Which may be because The Red Planet once had water and caused the rocks to decay in a wierd way making The Huge Face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f24c0374809,DE6E0F8EAA59,Have you heard about the face on Mars? If so it really isn't a face on Mars it's either a natural information or a alien artifacted. I'm going to tell you about what scientist think it is about another mission that got more pictures. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+00ac6cf3dc68,DE6E0F8EAA59,"Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around cydonia, only this one had unusal shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Although few scientist believe the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Gobal Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997 eighteen long years after the viking mission eneded. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6259ffcf8556,DE6E0F8EAA59,"Then Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snappped a picture ten times sharper than the origianl Viking photos. Thousnad of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing ... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around American West. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9da0ea45c66b,DE6E0F8EAA59,It really isn't a face on Mars it's either a natural information or a alien artifacted. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b7d4baa00568,DE6E0F8EAA59,All this information was from the Article and I believe that it is just a landform.   ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e1e836ef5142,DE7F02980A1D,"Basketballs get thrown around, paint splashes onto paper and adolescence start to open up their minds to logical thinking. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d7e6445f4ea6,DE7F02980A1D,Extracurricular activities should be required in schools ,Position,Adequate,,,
+145baa2427e8,DE7F02980A1D,they help students release stress ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b5299553409f,DE7F02980A1D,help thinking in a new way ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2a7feed49ada,DE7F02980A1D,makes school enthralling to those who have not been blessed with natural intelligence. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c3dbdad9ac5e,DE7F02980A1D,"Extracurricular activities can improve many students lifestyles. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2beb811d57d,DE7F02980A1D,"A long day of tiring work builds up unnecessary stress. Students are packed with homework in subjects they may not enjoy. To end their day with an activity they enjoy can make a horrific day into an enthralling experience; for example, majority of people like spending time with others who they have things in common with. Growing up, it was hard for me to socialize, it felt as if everyone else was functioning faster than Ic was. After a day that felt as if the human population was filled with nothing but sorrow, I finally got to go home and feel the crystal clear water cool my body down, as my team practiced steadily for our swim competition. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf5471a87fa7,DE7F02980A1D,"In the school I have attended for junior high, I am required to take classes that focus on music. In the sixth grade, I chose orchestra because it was an amusing experience to see how one movement in my wrist could cause a pleasant noise to be heard throughout the room. In my science class, we had moved on to the sound unit and i excelled while many other students did not. When my science teacher used words such as octaves, pitch, and harmony it wasn't difficult to understand. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9fc6e723375f,DE7F02980A1D,They taught me that there is more meaning on a paper than what is written in ink. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1c3cd9b9def,DE7F02980A1D,"One of the many symptoms of depression is memory loss. Since my mother had suffered from the illness, it was genetically passed down to me. Even as a child it was clear to me that school was mainly about memorization. When teachers talked about how we had learned topics in prior years my brain scattered through the many memories in my head but was unable to remember anything. Extracurricular activities aren't about your ability to memorize, but your motivation to excel. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4463e558552b,DE7F02980A1D,"Activities a student enjoys can introduce them to experiences they didn't know were possible. Extracurricular activities help students release stress from the hardships of their day, show them a way to think that they haven't seen before, and is beneficial for those who believe they are not intelligent. I believe that they would be helpful to students and help them excel in the future and should be required in schools. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1c3aa5ad6b08,DEA664963CD1,"In this passage the author talks about one of our plantes in the solar system named Venus. The author talks about earth like Venus is and reason why they cant go and reason why they can go and give differnt examples on how we could get that done. The author also talks about the natural stuff like valcanoes and earthquakes, and the conditions of Venus. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4874a1194604,DEA664963CD1,"In paragraph one the author give us some little facts about Venus such has how we can see Venus from Earth itself and another name for Venus that many people may have never heard of""Evening Star"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5a6a5f44c431,DEA664963CD1,A spacecraft hasnt landed on Venus in 3 decades due to the harsh conditions. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ff91eb52459c,DEA664963CD1,That is no excuse. The mission to land on Venus is a challenge at hand but it can be survived by humans. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e4f2a3eb18dd,DEA664963CD1,There were differnt ways they could approach Venus. The 1st way is to basically hotair ballon on Venus and the 2nd way is to just land. Its very challenging but can be done. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b48d481701cd,DEA664963CD1,"In paragraph 3 they talk about how Venus is earthlike. Some examples are that Venus has oceans, valcanoes, lighting strikes, earthquaks and much more. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffef21d02b1d,DEA664963CD1,In the next serval paragraphs the author talks about how and why they could get to Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b9e2e151bf8,DEA664963CD1,"SO they would use a spaceship to get there but would hotair ballon on the planet itself to stau away from everything. The only problem is there isnt technolgy good enough to render photos that are taken from the ground below. There fore if they really want smaples and all that thye have to get on the ground. Its survivable but the conditions are harsh and challenging. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa6275224a97,DEA664963CD1,The author then wraps up the story talking about how we strive to meet these challenges and where it can lead us ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4306fb249622,DEA664963CD1,. I feel like we should amd should be able to study Venus from a close range. I think the dangers can be overcomed with lots of training and simulations that are inspried by Venus's harsh condistions. I also belive that we can survie venus with good technology. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+af73fd34aec1,DEA664963CD1,"I know we have it we just done want to release it into the world which makes sense but at the same time we could have billions of people living on 2 differnt planets. Our technology is not quite there yet though, but we're getting somewhere. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8dce39c1fe88,DECDC46197E4,Should student projects be designed by teachers or students? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+99ad6d66dae6,DECDC46197E4,"They should be designed by students, they can choose a topic that they would prefer or something that isn't too hard on them. ",Position,Effective,,,
+fc7275c625f7,DECDC46197E4,"Sometimes teachers assign work that is difficult for students to complete, and without a teachers help during the summer you could be lost with the directions they give you. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5e2eb695c4d7,DECDC46197E4,"Teachers could give out a really confusing rubric for the project, a student might not understand what they must do to meet the proper criteria for the project. The teacher is out for summer break too, they probably dont have the time to check their e-mail constantly to help you out when your stuck so if students would design their own projects they wouldnt have the stress and hardship of a teacher designed project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+861401ba13b1,DECDC46197E4,If students could design their own projects they would be able to work freely without a confusing rubric and the trouble of having to wait for a teacher to e-mail you back ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c7bcab1cb60,DECDC46197E4,"Not all students want to be told by teachers to make a diorama or make a poster, some students dont have the time or resources for that, If its the summer then students want to be out on vacation, helping out their parents, or getting jobs. If they could create a project that doesnt interfere with that then that would be great for them. If they are able to manage their time then they can take time making a project instead of rushing through it to get it done in what little time they have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af20937168ff,DECDC46197E4,"But assigning this task to students is a great way for them to show their work ethic, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6f9fad9640e1,DECDC46197E4,"some students could surprise their teacher by showing them how well they can accomplish a task without someone supervising them the whole time. Its a great way for them to be prepared for life after school. Sometimes you will have to complete tasks on your own with no help and you need to be prepared for that or its going to be hard on you if you've never had an experience before hand. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9705cb22564,DECDC46197E4,Student designed projects are also a great way for students to be creative and to show their creativity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5fdffd99a1de,DECDC46197E4,"If all the students were assigned a project on the same exact topic, many of them will turn the same exact projects in. But if they were able to have creative control then they can diversify their projects, lets say you were assigned a history project, this project was about photosynthesis, Many students would turn in a plant cell thats labeled with all the parts of the cell and then they would either label a paper with how plants photosynthesize or why they do it. Most if not all of the projects would be similar, unless they were able to choose them on their own. If they could choose they could do a project on How the Rocky Mountains were formed, or how active the Ring of Fire is. Then the projects would be more interesting to not only the teacher but the students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+637d814bc464,DECDC46197E4,"
+Another reason on why students should have the freedom to create their own projects is that they wouldnt have been assigned a project that they find boring, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fbb273acffd5,DECDC46197E4,"The chances are if a student is bored with their work, they are not going to do a good job on it. They didnt have the motivation of learning or finding it interesting, they just simply want to get it done and over with. But if they do a project they find interesting, not only could they be happy with their work but they would would most likely preform a better job than if they didnt. Not only would they be satisfied with being able to have freedom over their work, but they would be satisfied with the work they put into it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cfed798c96d6,DF082C5AC45E,"Imagine growing up in a city 30 miles above the ground and wearing a suit all the time to protect yourself from the envirement. This is life on the planet of Venus. There are many dangers such as the temperature being 800 degrees Fahrenheit, the pressure that is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth, and clouds of sulfuric acid everywhere but is it worth it? 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+ed2dd8aa4988,DF082C5AC45E,"In this article there are many reasons to not explore Venus, some say it may not be able to be done but NASA belives that if we use a blimp like vehicle ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba57c954c5a1,DF082C5AC45E,to explore 30 miles above the surface then the temperature will drop to around 170 and the pressure will drop aswell. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3fc3d84325d,DF082C5AC45E,"There is a saying ""The needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few"" and in the situation of our planet being compremised in one way or another that is very true ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f1827eed1b4,DF082C5AC45E,If we need another planet to flee to we could go to Venus but we would need exstensive research first in order to find out if it is even possible to survive on that planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c285287600bd,DF082C5AC45E,Life would be a lot more difficult living on Venus but based on this article it might just be possible ,Claim,Effective,,,
+42887eef99df,DF082C5AC45E,Living on Venus would mean we would have to make tons of improvements in our technology so they wouldn't be totally inferior in the extreme conditions of Venus's weather. Our tech would have to able to handle all of the heat and everything else without over heating and exploding all the time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c4290587185,DF082C5AC45E,I think the author did a good job in explaining the conditions of the Venus and all of its surprises it holds for us to find. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+30170b8b8557,DF082C5AC45E,"The author also adresses the technology advancements we would have to make aswell as gives us motivation to explore and create by saying ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bc5b158609f9,DF1287CDBCF6,"Using technology to read students' facial expressions isn't the best thing to do. It could help the teachers show who understands, who doesn't understand, and who does and does't pay attention. This could help the teacher in many different ways. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+53c1b7cef147,DF1287CDBCF6,Using this to help the teacher is alright. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4abb5dccdcb1,DF1287CDBCF6,It could also become a distraction for the students. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+de409acab048,DF1287CDBCF6,"The teacher uses it to determine if the lesson that they are giving is hard for the students to understand or if they are doing really well with it. If the students realize that their facial expressions are being recorded or used for something, they could make so many faces into it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13aa3ca192c8,DF1287CDBCF6,It would be a nice thing to do ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+adb1cdae206a,DF1287CDBCF6,"With this kind of technology, it could help the teacher plan their lesson so the students can understand, but they don't get bored ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff7c8aaba8db,DF1287CDBCF6,"Interacting with students help them learn better, so if there are some confused, or not into the lesson, it shows that and can help get them to understand and get into the lesson. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72dafd46c31e,DF1287CDBCF6,"Teachers would have to think if this is really worth having, or is it going to do nothing for them. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+33ef6c9727be,DF1287CDBCF6,"Teachers want students to know how and what they are doing, but they need to learn how the students, know what to do and how to do it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7cd8e9dfb671,DF4E1B5910B6,"They say Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit. Its a crucial consideration given the long time frames of spave travel. The value of returnung to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e06413aaf4e4,DF4E1B5910B6,"I think if we can study Venus up close we'll get a better understanding of the planet, like what materials it has and how the weather conditions are. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+e957d71e96da,DF4E1B5910B6,"NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. A blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground.
+
+To meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f66275dc7a7a,DF76BBCD85B1,There is an argument going around on whether summer projects should be designed by students or teachers. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8898454d07c6,DF76BBCD85B1,The summer projects should be designed by the teachers ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a1fc15d702d9,DF76BBCD85B1,students won't challenge themselves in the summer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7476f0e29082,DF76BBCD85B1,teachers know what criteria the students should learn ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86a80e958d71,DF76BBCD85B1,it is the teachers job to give the students work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4982862fe40,DF76BBCD85B1,if students designed their own summer project they would make it easy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89c3065c4a9d,DF76BBCD85B1,"Most students can't wait for the last day of school so they don't have to do any work or should I say ""learn"".
+
+Also if they do a summer project it should help preview what they are going to be learning in the upcoming school year, so if they don't know exactly what it is that they will be learning why should they have to design their own project which most would not what to do in the first place.
+
+In addition to the students designing their own project there are a lot of potential problems that could occur.
+
+Like they forget to inform everyone else on what the project is.
+
+The students just are not mature or responsible enough to be able to design such a hefty task like a summer project all on their own. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+902e856f32b1,DF76BBCD85B1,they know what they will teacher in the following school year. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbcc35607f26,DF76BBCD85B1,"The students should begin to get informed or a little bit of knowledge on what they will be taught in the upcoming school year.
+
+The teachers that design the summer project should make it about topics that they will later teach the students on.
+
+For example, if there is a lesson on the cells in a plant for next year, maybe have the students create a plant cell out of recycled materials.
+
+Just little things so they come into the classroom ready and already with some knowledge on what will be presented in the school year. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+491b9b31d6b0,DF76BBCD85B1,its the teachers job to design such things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9f8cca52fae,DF76BBCD85B1,"A student should not have to worry about what they are going to do for a project.
+
+That is too much pressure on the youth.
+
+Instead maybe teachers collectively as a group come up with multiple project ideas for the students.
+
+Give the students multiple options on what assignment or project they would want to do.
+
+The teacher are getting paid to teach and come up with lesson plans.
+
+Therefore it should not be the students task to come up with any projects specifically one like a summer project. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+921de06ede58,DF76BBCD85B1,"On the other hand, if students design their own projects that could help them mature. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0a252253b808,DF76BBCD85B1,"Although it may just apply pressure and stress on the students which is what we don't want happening to them.
+
+We shouldn't make kids design their own projects especially if most don't want to do it. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a152d16b4e3d,DF76BBCD85B1,"Teachers should be the ones designing the projects due to the fact that they get paid to create such things as projects and know what lessons are going to be taught in the following year, and students just aren't ready for this type of task.
+
+The answer is rather clear that is should be the teachers designing the projects and not the students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea843b8008e8,DF7D4CA4A89E,Technology can make people mad in happy its just how you use it in how you do it like you can look up things that you know that will make you happy. But in this story its saying that the computers know when you happy or sad or even confused but then it can help the person because it say it can modify. Its a lot that the technology it can't look you in the face in see that something is wrong with you. The story is saying they want to know how people are feeling even when they are trying to hide it i think that is personal and the person will tell you if the person wanted you to know. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09a79300ca0c,DF7D4CA4A89E,But technology is good in so many ways but its bad in so many ways to. I think your emotions shoud stay to you if thats what you want and not base on if the technology want to know. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fad697f92d1b,DF890FC7D48F,"If every student were to participate is a after school activity or sport, then the school would keep getting better. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9ea21dcf3b0a,DF890FC7D48F,If the principle were to make this rule then everyone wouldnt be as lazy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+81f3da65d9e2,DF890FC7D48F,"When the principle makes this rule happen, no one would be left out of anything, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+446ce5d2dbe8,DF890FC7D48F,students would get better attitudes and grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88a55586288b,DF890FC7D48F,students would respect the teachers and other students as well. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6fc38a8ec743,DF890FC7D48F,Everyone gets to pick their sport or activity so that they will have fun doing it but still be working. They wouldnt have to participate in a sport or club that they dont want to but they would have to pick something. Everyone would have at least one friend because they have to work with each other all the time and they would learn to like each other. The whole school would be productive all the time and the schools systems would be improving every day. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+641da14714ff,DF890FC7D48F,Students would like what they do because they chose it and because they like it so much they will have better attitudes and behave better. Students wanna have good grades and be happy and this is the perfect way to make it happen. The more they experience in that club or team the happier the students are gonna be inside and outside of school. Some students are depressed and sad all the time so if we give those students people to hang out with and fun things to do we can wipe out all of the depression that those students have. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+779bb612a86c,DF890FC7D48F,If the students know and respect their teacher than they wont act up during class time and the class will be able to get more stuff done. If the students stop messing around in a teachers class than the teachers would respect them and the class could work hard to learn more everyday. The school would get better over time and soon the school will be active all the time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2a38e33cc13,DF890FC7D48F,Everyone would be doing something so that even the kids that dont want to do anything still have to. I agree with this principle in many ways and think he is absolutely amazing and his idea is a great one. If we all work together to get the whole school to be active than i think it would be possible and they would have a great school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4b5f62fe49b0,DFB074E89515,I agree with the principal ,Position,Adequate,,,
+756246f9bf04,DFB074E89515,because then there will be happy and healthy students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+54b55201eb31,DFB074E89515,The students will be happy because they don´t have to go home and be bored. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86bdf2f40af9,DFB074E89515,But what if students don´t like any of the activities. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5ded37eb1125,DFB074E89515,Then they can go and talk to the principal and see if they can add a new activity. But if not then they don´t have to do it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f4a8864a7e08,DFB074E89515,If we have to do a extracurricular activity. I would want to do sports any sport that i can play. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32bc73f1a50d,DFB074E89515,"But if that sport is boring or not fun to me then i will and talk to someone about it. But what time will this activity be going on after school, before school, during school. no one know what time this activity will be going on. This is something that we need to know so we can tell are parents or gardens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e95a6171de4,DFB074E89515,I think it will be fun doing another activity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24bb0b6896d7,DFB074E89515,Doing a extra activity will be fun well for some people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+832f28e64e6d,DFB074E89515,Some students might not like to do this and some students might want to do this. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae23533f837e,DFB074E89515,"But why does the principal think this is a good thing to do with use students. some might want to do that. But then we will have to pay and some students might not have the monny to do that. So then we will have to start doing fundraisers for the school so we will have monny for these things. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f179ee9c6271,DFC04AA3DC98,The Challange of Exploring Venus is the name of this article that I have just read. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3ef3b229d0ee,DFC04AA3DC98,"The author of this article seems to be in full support of pursuing the dangerous planet, but why thats what I'm here to tell you. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+944b0e05b50c,DFC04AA3DC98,First I'll begin with a description of some of the harshness of the planet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b251f903bfe,DFC04AA3DC98,"""A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere."" That is a description of the air and sky of Venus, now I will give a description of the surface of Venus. ""On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet."" Those are some harsh conditions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+379be10483db,DFC04AA3DC98,The author seems to be with the idea of exploring Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5dcb36473ccd,DFC04AA3DC98,"There are some very interesting things that the author brings up such as ""a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way."" this seems to prove that it could be possible ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1fd782e7f744,DFC04AA3DC98,"but what about power, the temperature, and air pressure ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5ae219829c48,DFC04AA3DC98,the author also included that. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d43f8cc40ec8,DFC04AA3DC98,"""At thirty-plus miles above the surface, the temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74c30b5d6e82,DFC04AA3DC98,So then what about the danger of radiation well it turns out that that is also brought up. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0882be26c8be,DFC04AA3DC98,"""Radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f09d06fd0f58,DFC04AA3DC98,"so that explains almost all the troubles of this trip and exploration, but there won't be much to see through all the clouds and the fact that going to the ground is too dangerous what could you possibly do. The author seems to support the idea of studying Venus really well, but I don't think that we know enough about the planet to determine whether going is in our best interest. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+62b20ee17e89,DFD1805B8F93,"Venus is like earths twin. The author stated in where the plant is loctaed. Venus tempature on the surface is 800 degrees. NASA is wanting to send people to the planet venus.
+
+NASA is wroking on other approachaes to studying Venus. They smiplified electronics that are made up of silicon. They are trying to make the modern day computers even faster then they are today. NASA trying to create a machine that well last long enough to contribute to Venus. Their wanting to make gear that also dont need electronce inquired.
+
+People call Venus ""The Evening Star"" becuase it is one of the brightest spot in the night sky. Although people mistaken it for a star its a planet. Venus is safer to see from the distance its been very challageing to exmane Venus. This planet is the secound planet away from our sun. Venus is the closest size to earth.
+
+The NASA is very facinated by Venus because is the most earth like planet. Venus surface is very rocky like valleys and mountains. NASA is request to send some people to go check out the planet Venus but that is nearly impossable . They think that at one point Venus was just coverd inh ocean. Venus is the nearst option to vist. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2fa6383ad986,DFD1805B8F93,I think that we should try and go vist Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ee9336da67d,DFD1805B8F93,how know what could be on the planet. If we do we should be real cafeul because there could be dangerous stuff there. Its an opertunaity to see what Venus good values are. We can also compare earth o venus. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+16cc9270db95,E0243DB9F8D2,"Do you believe in aliens? If so do you believe them living in outer space or perhaps on a different planet? Imagine if you worked for NASA and you found pictures about an ""Unmasking face on Mars"". What would you do or even think about if you had seen faces on the surface of Mars? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+66308b69a176,E0243DB9F8D2,I work for NASA and I have have found pictures about a face on Mars and through my perpectives I believe that its an alien on the surface on Mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0e18bf65e72e,E0243DB9F8D2,"The reason why I believe this is an alien because the face is an absolute landform of an alien. These photos were taken 1976, 1998 and 2001. In 2001 the face evolted more like a face of what humans it was of humans but I've been doing research that these faces are from aliens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee685fdb8818,E0243DB9F8D2,"Although it does look like a human face theres no body connected to it unless the body is stuck underneath the surface of the planet, but through my research I insist it's an alien. I do not have proof it is one but theres no proof of it being a human either. When the Mars Orbiter Camera went around Mars the face still had no evidence if it was either a human face or an alien artifact. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eba5394786fc,E0243DB9F8D2,In my case I still prove this to be an alien. We've done plenty of research and nothing has been found is it is a human face or an alien. My question is if that it was a human why wouldn't have we known it was a human if it died. Where'd the rest of their body go? Perhaps it was trapped under the surface but in no question I still believe this is an artifact of an alien. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e8d0cd70be6c,E04E83CEF5DA,I think that by reading a person's emotions is not the best way to know if the person is depress or happy. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+935bb22b0671,E04E83CEF5DA,If a person wants to be happy all day let them be ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b79bd74db9f5,E04E83CEF5DA,", and you can tell by thier face exprestion or by the actions they do through out the day..In paragraph three it's showing us by saying ""
+
+raise your eyebrows when you're suprise ; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth)tighten your lips to show anger"" every person that i know off knows that . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+74cb3c2deff9,E04E83CEF5DA,Why tell us information that we already know ? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cd68a3bdbc60,E04E83CEF5DA,"I get the person that trying to state there claim is trying to give us evidence and examples. In paragraph four it's telling us that when the software is tracking the persons emotion it shows them how many emotions they feel even if there mixed which agin doesn't make no sence for me because you can totally know or tell just by the person face expressing they do. In the very top off the article of mona lisa's picture you can totally see thats shes happy,ferful. And i only looked at the picture for some secounds which makes no sence of why i'll need a device to tell me how she feels. In paragraph six it's showing us that if your in a classroom confuse a teacher can stop the lesson and tell you which part you don't get . Which is good at some point it's not because what if the teacher stop because of one student and then seconds later or minutes later the person changes to a complety different mood . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6917fcaf5f0a,E04E83CEF5DA,"At the end i think that there's no need for you to know if the person if feeling bad or happy .What if the person is feeling not so good because of family issues? As a person , we wanna just move on and not remind are self of what just happen because it'll make us more disapointed then we already are. I think that less technoloy makes people less crazy and less stressful. The new technoloy is going way to far for this to just makes this up and just imagin something even worst that they made up off. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+633de4967f5e,E05ACF2DFCB8,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break . Should these summer projects be teacher designed or student designed ? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9ee8d94b267e,E05ACF2DFCB8,These choices should be up to the students designe ,Position,Adequate,,,
+aa27dee0494c,E05ACF2DFCB8,If the student picks they will be more willing to do it . Much rather if the teacher designed the project for the students . They will learn more picking their own designe and enjoy it more if it is their own design ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+123a4eabea46,E05ACF2DFCB8,Some kids also may be limited when it comes to acess and supplies and might not be able to get ahold of the supplies they need for the project or things they will need for the project their teacher designed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e245d8d7559,E05ACF2DFCB8,With having students designe their own projects instead of the teacher will make the project more enjoyable. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c9707c38d12,E05ACF2DFCB8,Some students will dilike what their teacher has provided them with . This being said it wont be enjoyable and will most likley they wont do it or wont learn anything because they wont be doing it or paying attention to what they are doing. If they dont do it or pay attention to it they wont get the learning experience the teachers want and with it being summer time they will probaly dislike their summer as well. If they dont learn anything there was no point of giving them the project . It should be enjoyable for them so they can have a fun leanring experiance and also have something fun to do over the summer and it being their choice it might make things extra fun for them . If they get to pick it they will proably be happy to be told they have a project to do over the summer and it being vacation they could also come up with something alot more funnier and a better learning experiance then a teacher could. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+757668aab889,E05ACF2DFCB8,If the teacher designes the project the students may or may not have supplies for that project . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96a5ecbab2ec,E05ACF2DFCB8,They might not have it because they arent at home or on vacation because its summer time or maybe just might not be able to afford the supplies needed for the project. If the student can designe their project for them selfs they will most likly pick a project they can afford the supplies for or can get . Also saying the fact its summer time you could pick a project to challge yourself because you might be in a diffrent place . Some projects the students could designe could be no money for them at alll and still a good learning experience that was fun for them and not having to pay any money could help out the students who cant afford a project a teacher may have designed . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d9831e571ff,E05ACF2DFCB8,some parents and teachers say alllowing the students to design their own project is care less and they will make horrible choices. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+05f02cd1bae9,E05ACF2DFCB8,However allowing students to design their own projects will allow them to challege themselfes . They will also probley pick a project that is enjoybal to them and will make the learning experiance so much better and the students will most likely complte a project they ejoy doing. Also allowing students to design their own project wont make them be careless it will allow them to make adult choices on their own . This being said will show how much they are growing up and how they can make good choices on their own and how they can do it by themselfs . Allowing them to pick it will mostlikly make them make better choices much rather then carless ones . ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+04979913cf13,E05ACF2DFCB8,The design of what project the students are given in the summer should completly be their own design not the teachers. If the students design their own projects they will mostlikley do something they like . If they do something that they like they will get it done and the learning experiance will be so much better then if the teacher designed what the students where told to do over the summer . It being said if the students where able to design the project they would enjoy it and be able to get all supplies they need for it because the teacher might pick something the student might not like or something they cant get supplies for. They would also probaly love to be told they have a project to do over the summer if it was their design and get it done. So overall students should be allowed to design their own projects so they can learn more in the summer.  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f7b92ab917de,E09942089364,"What would I say if I were a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens, when I don't? I would first off say they're are no such things as aliens. There is no evidence that aliens are real. The only evidence we have are pictures that people send in of ""UFOs"" or ""aliens"" being spotted. Seriously those pictures could be easily edited with the power of the internet. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+febf92402409,E09942089364,The Face is just a natural landform! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+385f38e92dda,E09942089364,"The Face, like many other landforms, looks (hince the name) like a face! Have you ever past by a hill, rock, or any other landform that kind of looks like a human or any other human part? If you have than you know what I'm talking about. Sometimes you start thinking ""why does it look ike that?"" or ""what if someone's body is buried there?"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d27d22daa597,E09942089364,"Although the Face looks like a face, it may have not been built by aliens. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+809cc76a72bc,E09942089364,"Like NASA said when they unveiled the image for everyone to see, it's just a ""huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."". The Face was just formed by shadows and your eyes playing a little trick on you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bbc4a4e8d94b,E09942089364,"We don't have enough evidence to prove that aliens created this, so it's much better if we stick to my idea. It's all the work of your eyes, shadows, and the form of the rock. If only we could go to Mars and figure out the truth. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a8cb4b90384c,E0C57C8B7FFA,"Smog, backed up traffic ways, and stress seem to be the main factor contributing to the decrease in car usage. Although these seem to be very negative factors, there are many advantages to limiting car use including helping our Planet Earth and less costly factors. ",Position,Effective,,,
+8d3e344e2717,E0C57C8B7FFA,"when we look at studies we find that when people use their cars immensely, there is a harmful effect in our atmosphere, also reffered to as The Greenhouse Effect. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c1f4de5a5151,E0C57C8B7FFA,"France has been a major component to this harmful gas, as explained by Robert Duffer in the passage
+
+Paris bans driving due to smog
+
+""Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals..."" In addition, Duffer continues to provide evidence to this claim by further emphasizing and comparing ""[Last] week Paris had 147 miocrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London,"" By including this simple sentence, we are fully aware of just how much harm pollution has done to the environment due to car uage in Paris. Moreover, the smog in Paris was so intense that ""Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city."" Although almost 4,000 drivers were fined, the smog had cleared enough by Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b829217cecda,E0C57C8B7FFA,"This movement is also spreading to places such as Bogota, Colombia where they have a day free of cars with the exception of taxis and buses; ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1fa8c91584a1,E0C57C8B7FFA,", in the article
+
+Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota by Andrew Selsky, businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza explains ""It's a good opputunity to take away stress and lower air polution,"" Many ideas are being formed to show that people care about what their harmful ways have done and are looking to find solutions to minimize the pollution and undo what wrong has been done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b36236056117,E0C57C8B7FFA,Buying cars over the years has become quite an expense to everyone and has become somewhat burden-like. By limiting and even canceling out the use of cars people have cut down expenses greatly. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95cea2b37bf7,E0C57C8B7FFA,"Public transportation is getting on board with this idea and trying to accomodate those who have made this decision by making public transit ""free of charge from Friday to Monday,"" according to the BBC in the article
+
+Paris bans driving due to smog . As also mentioned the importance of car is no longer such an immediate thought to people more recently.  Elisabeth Rosenthal solidifies this in the article
+
+The End of Car Culture when she includes ""recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by."" This clear and simple states that people are not considering their cars as such an extreme item and more considering it as a means of transportation only when absolutely necessary such as when ""Bay Area Rapid Transit doesn't work."" As well costs not only personally so much as federally are being affected dramatically. Elisabeth Rosenthal author of In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars explains ""In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport."" By intorducing this idea, people are aware that the advantage is personal and is in the everyday common person's favor. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+171025f3bd04,E0C57C8B7FFA,"Not only are the advantages of limiting car usage subtle however they are also direct and can have immediate positive effects on people. By making sure people do not overdo the amount they utilize their cars, they become less stressed, have a healthier environment, and save money. This issue is worldwide however, the solution is becoming worldwide as well creating exceptional results and care from car drivers and people are really thinking outside of the box to make magic happen. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+29794237a538,E0CF4993483B,"In ""THE CHALLENGE OF EXPLORING VENUS"" the author of suggests that studys venus is worthy pursuit despite the danger it peresnts. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+7ea5c875405e,E0CF4993483B,people say that venus is the twin to the earth ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6dda4574acdf,E0CF4993483B,"you may agree and alot of people will but there will always be someone that wont some people call it the the evening star because its the only thing that will be shining in the sky they dont blevie that its a plante but the people that belive that is a plante often they say ""often referred as earth's ""twin,"" venus is the closest plante to earth in term of destny and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too"" (pargraph 2). this shows that venus is the closest plante to earth as of looking and sistence. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c52e7514ab1c,E0CF4993483B,venus is the only plante that scintest studyed to see if humans can live in ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+70f557bc3ae8,E0CF4993483B,"it they tried everything to studie it if humans ca n breath in it but they only found the resultes when they stoped working on it because they couldnt understand it so they had to change the way they were going to send humans to venus so they just quit but they started studying some more stuuf coming up with names for it and stuff in the text it says ""venus, sometimes called the ""evening star""( pargarh1). this shows that that they came up with names for so people under stand what the star is. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+93b64ed189cf,E0CF4993483B,the artecal shows you how people can make nothing into something even if they fail they still can gt something else right or make something even though they tried to do something else.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+41a86786a857,E10D5E79B0A0,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author explains how certain algorithms built into a system, called the Facial Action Coding System, can detect human emotions. In the article, the author describes how a classroom computer can recognize when a student is getting bored or confused based on their facial expressions. This computer can change the way that the lesson is being taught so that the students are more productive in classes. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+46cb518cc1f1,E10D5E79B0A0,"While the Facial Action Coding System detects facial expressions that indicate a person's emotion, the system built in a classroom computer is valuable to students, because it can manipulate the lesson based on how students are learning. ",Position,Effective,,,
+68a13981d7fc,E10D5E79B0A0,"The ability to have a classroom computer that is able to read the emotional expressions of students, would be very valuable is a classroom, because it allows the lesson to be taught in a way that would benefit the students, according to Dr. Huang ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e5bad8230395,E10D5E79B0A0,"In a normal classroom, teachers create lessons that confuse the students or do not appeal to their learning ability which creates a tension for the learning environment. With the use of this technology, classroom lessons would be more educational and responsive. This is because, the technology is able to recognize when a student is confused or bored by reading their emotional and facial expressions. This is useful since the system can alter a lesson plan to be suitable for the students in the classroom which would potentially help them learn better. For example, if a student is confused during class, it is likely that they will not ask for help, leading them to not understand what is going on in the lesson. Having this technology in the classroom, would sense this and modify the lesson so that a student would be able to learn better and understand the topics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9da84042bfc3,E10D5E79B0A0,"The use of the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms would be beneficial in classrooms to both the students and the teacher, because it would allow the teacher to adjust lessons in order for more students to understand the concepts. Dr. Huang predicted that the system would be able to manipulate lessons based on the readings of emotional expressions in the classroom. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable, because it would benefit the student's learning ability in the classroom. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+54c2693011d1,E125061E7C8A,Did you have to do a project over the summer for school? If so that assignment was called a summer learning project and it's used to make sure students are learning over summer break. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0e5c5d0608bc,E125061E7C8A,"Although some might argue that the project should be student-designed, it should be a teacher-designed. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1d82b0badb9f,E125061E7C8A,Students being able to design their own summer projects would not make the project a leaning experience. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+70975570f899,E125061E7C8A,"A student would do the project on a topic that he/she already knows about instead of leaning something new because he/she would want to hurry up and go outside to enjoy the summer. For example, if a student already knows about the great depression and has to do a project on the topic about devastating things that has happened to the American economy he/she would write about the great depression because they already know what happened. There would be no need to go the library or research anything or learn something new. Teachers pick projects that will challenge his or her students to excel not only in the specific subject that he/she teaches but in life also. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ab1082fec001,E125061E7C8A,Teachers assign projects that will help their students do better in his or her class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7ae5473836cf,E125061E7C8A,"English teachers will assign a student a book to read that will have a theme that will be talked about throughout the entire year. Which allows students to be prepared in class and even do better in class because of the knowledge that they have gained by doing the project. Students will already have some insight on what the teacher expects and how they run their classroom based on the summer reading project. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7ea139809dc,E125061E7C8A,Teachers pick projects that keep students up to date on what's happening in society. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1f6907dcffec,E125061E7C8A,Government teachers assign summer project that help students learn laws that can keep them safe and away from prison and also help save others. It also helps them learn about their state Governor and how they are helping the people in the city that they live in and how they can help bring about change to things that they might not like. Teacher based projects keep students connected with the outside world. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+080acbd124d5,E125061E7C8A,Teachers should also pick the summer projects because it teachers student how to follow directions and how to be independent. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+16d06be38b90,E125061E7C8A,"It helps students learn how to only rely on themselves and not anyone else because you can not ask the teacher for help. The student has to learn how to do it themselves which is a skill everyone needs, it also teaches students how to follow directions, teacher gives out a rubric and the students must follow the rubric to get a good grade. If each student designed their own project each project would be different which would be thought for the teacher to grade and come up with a rubric for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+883437364654,E125061E7C8A,"Teachers should pick the summer reading because they only want what's best for their students. It helps them: learn,stay connected with the world, learn independence, and be an overall great student. If teachers keep picking the summer projects future students will become the important hard working men and women that will eventually run the world. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+33ac5792197d,E151FC867457,No they should not use the technology in class rooms because thats a invashion of pricicy. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+311e32e073f5,E151FC867457,And they dont need to know every little thing going on in our lives. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b80232e8cbc,E151FC867457,Becouse every one need there privicy and if schools use that technology there taking that away completly. And why would you use that in a class room any way to spy on people thats a little creepy you know and also why would the teacher even what that becouse thats looking at them too. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+295a489a7f30,E151FC867457,So there for in my choice the technology is not valuale and should not be put into classrooms or anywhere for that matter becouse every needs that privcy and no one will be able to get that if that technology is around ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e348817f3a8,E151FC867457,Another reason we should have it is becouse why would you want people to know your exact emotions anyways ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+635a07b9e05f,E151FC867457,if they can read your emotions they can pretty much tell what your thinking by that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a2c8b668c18,E151FC867457,So that is the reaons I think we should not have the facial action coding systems. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1517a57cc35a,E1BFD7E344FA,I think that is should be used. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b5d353746535,E1BFD7E344FA,One reason is should is because you will be abale to know if the student is doing good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+072779fe8cee,E1BFD7E344FA,Another reason is how the muscles work in a face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb93180d0b69,E1BFD7E344FA,The last reason is how can we make it better. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9284a6cd2d55,E1BFD7E344FA,The new software will help in many ways. One way is it will tell use if a student is okay. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43e9c30337e5,E1BFD7E344FA,"This will tell if they are making a fake smile to say that are fine, they really not. They could be having problems in there house or something like that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19f9b8f6ff35,E1BFD7E344FA,The software can tell witch muscle is being used. That is how it know if its a fake smile or are a reall smile. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e4458ceef4ba,E1BFD7E344FA,This will tech the students a face muscle. It will help tham later on how to tell a reall smile or a fake smile. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62d023af03f6,E1BFD7E344FA,Can the software upgrade? The students will proabley try to make it better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3acf429e6d7,E1BFD7E344FA,During the project they will learn stuff about the software. Later they will know what to do if it breaks or when they will creat a software. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d315e3fb2d1,E1BFD7E344FA,I say that is a good idea to have tha soft ware. It helps the students learn stuff. it teach them about muscles they have in the face. It will give them experence on softwares. I think is a good ides to have one. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c19fa05c2f97,E22134365CE5,I am against that the technology doesn't have the support to make her smile ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c59955ee0dd6,E22134365CE5,"because, it says ""His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code"" in the text. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2e083ccf0f6,E22134365CE5,"I claim that the technology doesn't do anything with the Mona Lisa because, she is smiling in the painting ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9e5cfb50634e,E22134365CE5,"because, it says "" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becomine confused or bores"" in the text. While looking in a mirror, you see your own reflection of yourself because, it says ""Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth bacause, technology can't do that. Then squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling (""crow's-feet"") at the corners of your eyes. Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up, toward your eyes"" in the text. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cbb4b48a8e7f,E22134365CE5,"I conclude that the technology can't support the smiles of people's faces because, there are muscles, tissues, and cartlige in the humans head. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corner of your mouth. (That's our instruction #1).
+
+Them Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b0253f818298,E22EDA0278ED,We should explore venus ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6ff92cafcf26,E22EDA0278ED,"people can not survive the landing, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+155b53b7035d,E22EDA0278ED,"the air is 97% carbon dioxide, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+350c6869f1cd,E22EDA0278ED,the enviorment is really hot too hot that people can not be able to live on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20685c72df57,E22EDA0278ED,And one resson that we sould start to explore venus is that people can not survive the landing to venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91435623c994,E22EDA0278ED,"and a quot from the text is ""no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours."" and that proves we need to start exploring venus because it shows us our mistakes in our space craft. Just think of how we will be able to improve our studys in space exploration. And we can upgrade our spaceships to spacecrafts maybe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04b070ea6b7b,E22EDA0278ED,And anouther reson on why we need to keep exploring mars is how there is 97% of carbon dioxide in the ai. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2519e1f72d95,E22EDA0278ED,"and one pice of evidence from the text is ""A thick atmoshere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. "" And that is anouther reson to keep studdying mars, because we can learn how is was created and how it got there and also how long people live there before they die so many posibilatys that we can have about gasmask and air chambers. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1fb48577e45,E22EDA0278ED,And lastly the final reson on why we shouldn't end the venus exploration is that the heat the planet has. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+faac01dfc871,E22EDA0278ED,"and one piece of evidnce that the text gives us about on hot venus is, is "" on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fhrenheit"" and that shows us that we can learn on how to live on hot planets without buring into a crips also it shows us how far we can go with our air coolers to try to lower the heat. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5308afea9c9,E22EDA0278ED,And that is all the ressons why we should not stop exploring venus. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+13b9219b306e,E27F2BAC8CD9,Limiting car use is not a new idea. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ccdf87cdf5b6,E27F2BAC8CD9,"It has been around for about 10 years now, but there has been a major spike in car usage and carbon-based emissions. Less and less people are using a car, and car sales have also gone in a downward spiral. Company chairman for Ford, Bill Ford, proposed a buisness plan for cities that have no practical use at the Mobile World Congress in Spain. Since even before the recession, less and less people are obtaining their licenses, and there has been an increase in major city populations, where driving is severly discouraged. Changes like these are leading to lower emisssions, improved saftey, conserved resources, and saved time, according to Ford. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4a09e460b33,E27F2BAC8CD9,"Between 2001 and 2009, there was about a 23 percent drop in young people getting their license. These numbers are inspiring cities all over the world to make a change and do their part to make a change in the world. The capital of Columbia, Bogata has something known as a ""car-free day,"" where only busses and taxis are permitted to be on the road. Other drivers will face a $25 fine. Even in the rain people continued to not use their car. Two other Columbian cities, Cali and Valledupar, also joined in for the first time this year. Bogota has a population of around seven million people ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74c950fa0878,E27F2BAC8CD9,"so even if they stop just a quarter of them from driving, then that could cut down on a lot of carbon-based emissions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+73ff27ff5e7f,E27F2BAC8CD9,"In Paris, France, drivers were given 22-euro fines for even numbered license plates on one day, then odd numbered license plates the next. Congestion was down 60 percent, and this was after five days that Paris' emissions could rival those of major cities in China. France's tax policy that makes diesel fuel more viable than gasoline was partially to blame, according to Reuters. Diesel engines make up 67 percent of cars in France, which is much higher than their European counterparts. Compared to other captials, Paris has a much higher particulate matter as well. It had over 30 more micrograms than the next highest, which is Brussels, mostly due to the cold nights and warm days, which would trap carbon. After the smog was cleared, Paris released the ban on certain numbered license plates.
+
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba4732dd9f17,E27F2BAC8CD9,Another advantage to having no cars is that we have more people walking or riding their bike. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cdd2e5c9d443,E27F2BAC8CD9,"While obesity rates in America have been turned around and are trending in the right direction again, there is always more that can be done. It will get people to be more active, and maybe try to eat healthier so they have more energy to walk to where they are going. There will always be obese people, especially in developed countries where junk food is sold around every corner. But we help those who want to change and be healthier by giving alternative choices instead of sitting while commuting. Of course, it would be ridiculous for somebody to have to walk 10 miles to get to work. Not everything can be perfect. Suburban towns would likely fade out of existance, making large cities larger and more intemit. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+030b6ab25068,E27F2BAC8CD9,"Cars will never fully vanish. But you can do your part. The next time you have to go to the store that's withing walking distance, take a bottle of water and head out. Greenhouse gasses could be stopped, and it all starts with you.                                                           ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0797ae47fd72,E286AD066204,"It is no question that some teachers like to give out work over the summer. In fact, some schools even require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning over their break. There are those arguing that such projects should be student-designed; however, this is a bad idea in the long run. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+724ff3e21425,E286AD066204,"summer projects should be teacher-designed. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+a132ec0d9f5c,E286AD066204,"For starters, teachers know the curriculum and know what students need to learn, especially for the upcoming school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6ff0d8c51f82,E286AD066204,Teachers can also give an overall theme and provide many mini topics for the students to do their project on to help with creativity and a higher chance of individuality. Teachers can also hand out rubrics for their students to help them stay on track and to let them know what should and what should not be included in their projects. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d9969be76d80,E286AD066204,Projects designed by teachers can almost always guarantee a student is learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1700b395cbb6,E286AD066204,"Students do not know it all, so if they were to create their own summer project, it would most likely be based around something that they already know much of; however, if a teacher designed the project, this would insure a way of making sure all students learn something new. Teacher-designed projects are also a way for students to get a taste of what the following school year is going to be like, which can give them a head start. Lastly, if students designed their own projects, the chances of it being organized is slim-to-none; whereas, if teachers designed the projects, it would have a purpose, a flow, and be well organized all at the same time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18441512b620,E286AD066204,"Although some may disagree, teacher-designed summer projects deem to hold much more beneficial qualities over student-designed projects. From keeping an overall theme and being well organized to helping students get a leg-up for the upcoming school year, teacher-designed projects just have a more positive outlook overall. Although student-designed projects seem like a good idea, it will ultimately just turn into a giant, unorganized mess where the students do not even learn anything new. In conclusion, summer projects would be better off if it were designed by teachers. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9954dd370322,E28D7D67A8F7,"When Nasa discovered this ""face"", at first they didn't know what to say. So they just passed it as another ""Martian Mesa"". ""Scientist figured it was just another Martian Mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Eighteen years later after the Viking space trip, they decided to take more photos of it. The technology improved so it was giving them a clearer image. They got the pictures, and soon put them out for the public to see. ""The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars"". Thousands of people that were waiting for this image soon saw it was just a landform, ""JPL website, revealing...a natural landform, There was no alien monument after all"". Then later they figured out that the picture was acually a butte or mesa. ""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, landforms common around the American West"". Garvin says, ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b4225e68c17,E2A07EFFFA7E,I think using the Facial action coding system in students in a classroom is not good and the same thime bad. The students shouldt be using that they dont know what can go wrong. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+838927ed8c5c,E2A07EFFFA7E,The technology in 2018 is getting bigger and smarter. The technology is taking over jobs and everything. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bfe62bb56a48,E2A07EFFFA7E,The facil action coding can be use for some important hings like like they can use it in the police office or somewhere that they really need it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a48528392948,E2A07EFFFA7E,The students can choose to use it or not they wont do it if they dont want to thats like making u do it. Some students will be surpice and some afraid of what might happen to them if something goes wrong. The technology makes alot of great things to hellp us who needs it. Teachnology can end up with the world if bad people do bad things to technology. I just want to be safe and have technology that helps me do good in my life. I maybe use the facial action coding to see how my emotions are but not use it for fun every minute ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3cb2097d4818,E2A07EFFFA7E,The Facial Action coding should work just find so all students can use it if is lik e we trying to see if it works good then the students shouldt use it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39b766a011af,E2A07EFFFA7E,I think that the Facial Action Coding should only be use when that person wants to try it and is not scare of what would happen if sometimes goes wrong while checking her or his emotions. Techology sometimes is bad and good but more times is for the good ways to us. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4a3c97b28a1c,E2B2ABB01662,This technology of reading student emotions in a classroon room is unvaluable .I dont know why ANYBODY WILL MAKE THIS UP.Some people dont want nobody to know how there feeling. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+78c4054de7f8,E2B2ABB01662,Im so against this creation i would not like my classmate to know how im feeling i dont care is i'm happy or sad . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8b11152214d5,E2B2ABB01662,The article stated that a computer will recognize if your even faking your emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fccd1c9b409,E2B2ABB01662,I dont think its nobody part in life to know the next person emotions. only if your a conesilor you should know someone emotion or how they feel other than that NO this is a horible idea. iN Paragraph 5 it tells us it help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. The computer will even know all your muscles in your body to help them fing how your feelings this is real not cause for at all some people want to keep there life personal a possible. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ffd6f835ec9e,E2B2ABB01662,"so yes, this coding system in very agaist it i can see if somebody would want you to know how there feeling. Not asking them in just doing it is respecting eachother space. This was a horible idea for someone to come up with. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eff746eba051,E2BB0AA98EA5,Well i dissagree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+83bee57a7559,E2BB0AA98EA5,why can the teachers do the work always wanting students to help so i dissagree ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0eccb39cf8eb,E2BB0AA98EA5,"because if they can do it they shouldnt make other people wanna do it,but i would also work on the yearbooks beacuse you are the one who is doing it all so you do it the way u want to ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44d6027afca3,E2BB0AA98EA5,Kids should also have multipul choices to choose what they wanna do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09585a79e7bf,E2BB0AA98EA5,because here they only give them like three options that honestly is not far well thats my opinon other people might think other wise ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9f994447b76,E2BB0AA98EA5,I also agree because it will help kids get personal stuff outta there mind ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+36ec8e413300,E2BB0AA98EA5,"example parents fighting,getting bullied,over thinking,depression,there are many more examples these are just ones that came out of my mind because i wouldnt really think about stuff like this. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+833c28ca1518,E2BB0AA98EA5,Student council is actually really good ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0a040bd63388,E2BB0AA98EA5,i used to be in it but i got kicked out because my behavior and grades when i was in it i didnt put much effort like i didnt care about it but it was the only thing that had my grades good and now since im not in it i never have anything to do i wish i would have not behave the way i had so i would have not gotten kicked out but it is what it is ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbbd13fc4cd9,E2BB0AA98EA5,The principal actually is thinking because he does what new things for them in life ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8964fec36129,E2BB0AA98EA5,so when they grow up they can say i did this i didnt do this and on the other hand if u dont do that you wont be able to even have fun you have to try new things in life because without trying you wont get anywhere in life. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+999fdb5ad21c,E2BB0AA98EA5,they should have more options for the students to choose because not all students might like those options ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b01137d70d2,E2BB0AA98EA5,maybe they have other things in mind like gaming like you never know what they could be thinking you should let them speak out maybe they have even better ideas you never know because students have open minds some people dont know that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f486ab7584f,E2BB0AA98EA5,I just want you to let the students have a voice and not just the adults ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e5bc9c8d0fe3,E2BCA7B63A7E,Why should cars be limited? Theres really no reasson why. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5fe5c7b0a999,E2BCA7B63A7E,"I see that all cars are is a deadly machine that can kill anyone at anytime. over a hundred inasent people die every mouth by a car accident or and motorised viache colision.
+
+Theres some places around the world where cars are limited to residents owning a car. For example: Vauban, Germany. Just because theres to many people that do not own any type of transportation have to walk the streets and so the people that own cars have a hard time trying to get places with all the people crowding the streets. when theres to mant people walking it beggins to back up traffice to a point people give up there cars to actual get to their work on time or to see a movie before it starts ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5778c8f100dc,E2BCA7B63A7E,I belive cars should be limited to the point where people have to walk. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c0b75a0cb695,E2BCA7B63A7E,To cut down the obesity rate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86b91b40ef40,E313B4A45475,"The new technology which is called Facial Action Coding System should be banned because let's see if your sad or angry, you wouldnt want other people to know how you feel instead of just telling them by your own ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b3d4409d8b73,E313B4A45475,"It sometimes can be use for just certain things and if that person gives you permission to look at the Site, then yeah it can be used to determine how they are feeling. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cab9009e943f,E313B4A45475,Some people may think this new technology may be an awesome technology ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+66f2217bf189,E313B4A45475,but some other people may also think that is just as same as other technology ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3d3777a96943,E313B4A45475,"For example, ""If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different."" This means that this technology mostly works only when your smile like it said on the text. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c8a8b7b5de2,E313B4A45475,Yeah it may be awesome to other people ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4e65a1408d8d,E313B4A45475,but like i said it should be banned because there is no point on having that techology if that person tells you how they are felling. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+31c6d34bbb45,E313B4A45475,"Clearly, this technology should be banned because it is not used correclty and every person who uses it is, it's using it too much and that's not how it works. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7450b143280c,E313EE03F35F,the author of the story says that venus is very worthy pursuit ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+661e26b93972,E313EE03F35F,because it is the closets to earth. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c4a40a11aadf,E313EE03F35F,What he means by saying closest is terms like density and size of venus is the same of earth. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a550f460d433,E313EE03F35F,The author also says venus is our planetary neigbor. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+14595399e7fd,E313EE03F35F,Venus does orbit the sun at diffrent speeds then us so that could be a diffulcty for us to get to venus to. we usaully are closer in time to mars then we are to venus at times. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b5572f960e9,E313EE03F35F,Humans have already tried landing diffrent types of of space crafts to venus. those space crafts have all failed or have not survived more then a couple of hours on the surface. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc3e65129c22,E313EE03F35F,It would be very hard to survive in venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8711af82efc3,E313EE03F35F,"because of its condition its covered by blankets of corbon dioxide, clouds are corrosive sulfiric acid, 800 degrees weather, and the pressure is 90 times greater then earths. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8399fbadb216,E313EE03F35F,but venus could have all been eath like at one point. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1b438905d920,E313EE03F35F,Venus could have been covored in oceans and supported many forms of life. scientist want to make blimp like cars so the humans that are sent to venus wouldnt have to touch the ground of all those gases. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4da796114c29,E313EE03F35F,This is why scientist think it a worthy pursuit to keep studying venus. they are getting closer and closer to overcoming this challange. they have allot of options on how to survive on venus. Once they get it it can help us with allot of things. thats why scientist wont stop studying venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d5e0c231485,E3349F640D64,"With the information the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" covers, this advancement in technology seems extremely unnecessary and could potentially have negative effects even with the good intentions behind it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+1091c98b35e6,E3349F640D64,"As far as what is explained in this article the only benefit to this technology is that computers will know what you are feeling, and the question that needs to be asked is; do we really want them to? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f7fc585f42b7,E3349F640D64,"Secondly, there was no mention of how much this kind of technology costs or if it would even be plausible for it to be in a classroom setting. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb92042e2d90,E3349F640D64,"Lastly, why is it be necessary for a computer to overtake yet another aspect of a teacher's job of human interaction and communication. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2233c9d9e42c,E3349F640D64,"Technology being able to read emotional expressions in the classroom sounds wildly ludicrous in terms of use, cost, and personal connections ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b8089ba11ab,E3349F640D64,"Although all seems harmless on the forefront of this idea, the side effects could turn very sour very quick. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+67882caead0e,E3349F640D64,"Nick D' Alto says ""Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad."" The author of this article talks of how it will improve ad placements by whether you smile or frown, however I know for a fact social medias, especially Facebook, are already basing information on preferable ads by just what material you look at. Why is it necessary for a program to constantly scan our face just to see if we like something or not? This gives the computer so much power of constantly knowing what your exact emotions are on everything. It is just so unnecessary that it causes one to question why in the world would we risk giving computers that kind of power. Also, is it appropiate to constantly scan childrens' faces as they are trying to learn? Would there be a security system in place or parental agreement necessary that would allow the permission of constant invasion of privacy in the name of education? There are many ethical questions and unknown future outlooks that one would not want to subject children to that sort of test of safety and security. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+37a08df99977,E3349F640D64,"However if this technology was to be used in a classroom, the next question is of course the cost of such a new computer process. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3f8c85cc815b,E3349F640D64,"All computers would have to have facial recognition in their system and although there is no mention of cost in the article one can imagine that this new technology is not cheap. Is it realistic to expect that schools will pay great amounts of tax payers dollars just so that we can invade the privacy of our children to figure out if they are bored? It seems much more financially sound to not steal the jobs of millions of teachers and let them get to know their students, opposed to scanning their face. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d26824735622,E3349F640D64,Teachers are necessary in the classroom not only to impart knowledge but also to make those personal connections that tell them how to best teach their kids. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bc4658388670,E3349F640D64,"Every student is different, learns a different way and reacts differently to every aspect of the classroom. The article says a computer will be able to detect if a student is bored, but teachers have that ability already, minus the cost and invasion of privacy. Teachers are in the classroom so that they can make those personal connections with each student and ensure that they are doing everything they can to provide the best education possible. If a computer detects boredom it will just try another lesson without knowing what is best for the student. So the question that needs to be asked is why would this sort of technology be useful in the classroom? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5e7f71a7f032,E3349F640D64,"In conclusion technology that scans your face to read your emotions has too many ethical questions, financial problems, and no personal connections for this computer process to be acceptable in the classroom. Although this advancement is impressive, the classroom setting is most definitely not the right place for this type of computer process. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+135f2aba13db,E34D011F7B98,why should we participate in being a Seagoing Cowboy? Some people ask but barley anyone knows. This might help us some times. But I think this will tough ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+89c4e3095b31,E34D011F7B98,We should do this ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc84d64421bf,E34D011F7B98,it might help us ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fc17357cc4c,E34D011F7B98,you sometimes get free time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da168b7329cc,E34D011F7B98,it is easy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a620b2bc43ba,E34D011F7B98,This job might help us alot ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a32c43be2e4,E34D011F7B98,We can earn money and get a new house. You are shipping things. Things like milk dairy and other things. You could get a new house or a new car it might be able to be big small or whatever size you want it to be. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+729454b803f3,E34D011F7B98,On this job you sometimes get freetime. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4234f37a7d01,E34D011F7B98,"You get freetime if you work hard on your job. The games we can play are like Poker, Cards, and more. If we don't want to play games we dont have to play any games. Therefore it is your choice if you want to play games or not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ed2ad38857b,E34D011F7B98,this job is very easy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb5835e6e997,E34D011F7B98,"Mostly because all you have to do is ship crates with animals in them. The story says Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The job is probaly the easiest job you can find. So if you want this job for any reason it is a great job. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a088a8172565,E34D011F7B98,"The job is great for all of these reasons. if you frogot what they were the reasons are that it might help us, you sometimes get free time, and it is easy. I think this job would be great for any of us. So if you want this job and if I were you then I would take it. Therefore I think this is a great job. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d06d34dd6307,E36560297AD9,"I'm sure most students would agree that teachers really know how to put you to work, while that sounds like a bad thing, it's actually very helpful. Teachers know how to drill information into a student's brain. However, I do understand why students would want to be in charge of organizing summer projects. Students want projects to be fun and easy, usually with as little work as possible, as to where teachers would more than likely want as much work as possible ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2ffddefa3bb4,E36560297AD9,"Sure it can be difficult but, there are many reasons why teacher-designed summer projects would work better. ",Position,Effective,,,
+834563530579,E36560297AD9,"Because teachers are more experienced with designing summer projects, they know what is needed to help students construct a great project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a619e95bda38,E36560297AD9,Teachers can also assist in giving pointers to how students can be more engaged with their projects. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2379e8a1a5ff,E36560297AD9,"As difficult as it might seem, the challenges that teachers set for students, actually help benefit in teaching students the material. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5a74b552a3f0,E36560297AD9,"Teachers have organized many summer projects throughout their years of teaching. They are more qualified to organize them because, they know what material students struggle with and they know how to make the information stick. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+34c224d6e81b,E36560297AD9,"Teachers have lots of experience with helping students create summer projects, therefore, should be the people who organize them. While the work may seem tedious and difficult at times, teachers are simply just trying to assist in helping you gain the knowledge and understand it. By giving students a lot of work, teachers are helping them learn not only the information being attained from the project but also, how to manage their time efficiently. Teachers understand that when students are working in a time frame, they have a better understanding of how to manage their time to work efficiently and get everything done before the due date. Experienced teachers can guide students in how to manage their time, get everything done, and still have time to spare. It is because of experienced teachers that students have been able to construct outstanding summer projects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4bf56e6133b3,E36560297AD9,"If a student is engaged, they are more likely to succeed. Teachers engage students by designing summer projects in a way that interests them. A student who is engaged in their project is more likely to receive a good grade than a student who showed no interest in it at all. Teachers typically try to stick to things that inspire all students equally, they try not to lean towards a specific influence as to remain unbiased. Students have many different interests which is why student-organized projects would be beneficial. A teacher with a good understanding of their student's likes and dislikes can better organize a project that will help students be engaged. Keeping students engaged is a difficult, but manageable, task and while not every teacher can do it, they all try. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e4d522468cd,E36560297AD9,"Challenges can motivate students into working their hardest and trying their best. While some may argue that challenging work actually causes students to be less inclined to do summer projects, it actually motivates them more. Statistics show that students who are challenged receive better grades than those who are not. If students were to organize a summer project, they would more than likely leave out any form of a challenge, students would much rather have free time than work on a summer project and that would lead to students designing an easy summer project that requires little effort. Teachers on the other hand, give students lots of work so they can gain the information in a much better way. Summer projects aren't made to take up all your free time, they are made to make sure the information that was being taught during school actually stuck and that students fully understand it. Teachers who challenge their students are the teachers with the highest passing scores. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+371417fc292e,E36560297AD9,"Teachers can organize a summer project better than students because they are highly experienced in doing so. Teachers find ways to engage and challenge their students which leads to a higher passing rate. So while student-designed projects can be fun and easy, it's more effective when summer projects are teacher-designed. The biggest problem with teacher-designed projects is that not every teacher or student is the same, However teacher-designed projects are said to be more successful than student-designed projects. They are not always fun, but they are always effective. Teachers are always working to help students gain information and be successful in life. So next time you have a summer project and you want it to be student-designed, think about all the things your teachers do to make sure you are going to be successful. It isn't supposed to be easy, and it isn't always going to be fun, but as long as you learn the information, it will always be beneficial. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ab889f1dd700,E37D480CD473,Summer assignments are required by a multitude of schools accross the state of Virginia. But some school districts are considering breaking from the traditional teacher-designed summer projects and instead replacing them with projects designed by the students ,Lead,Effective,,,
+14815bdd61cf,E37D480CD473,"This may reflect student desires, however, it does not reflect what is best for the students education. Summer projects should be designed by teachers rather than students because it would be in the students own best interest. ",Position,Effective,,,
+9d7d104bb4d3,E37D480CD473,Summer projects are intended to be used as preparation for courses students are going to take in the upcoming school year ,Claim,Effective,,,
+39d9cb90104c,E37D480CD473,"Therefore, how could students be sure of what content should be emphasized; what ideas are the most important; and what materials, such as books and web sources, are the best? Furthermore, teachers will have a far greater knowledge of the courses at hand. Often times theachers will have particular material they want to be covered or emphasized over the summer. For instance, many Humanities teachers have specific books that they want students to read. Even though these books may be longer and harder than many students desire, they likely cover crucial material or are written in a certain literary style that is going to be taught about. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ea725bda55f,E37D480CD473,"Some may claim that in order to have effective learning, students themselves must control the different components of their eductation. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8b16000331de,E37D480CD473,"While this may be true for some aspects, such as selecting the courses they wish to take, this should not be the case for summer assignments. This is because many students may take advantage of an opportunity to design their own summer projects, by making them as quick and easy as possible. While this may allow students to enjoy their summer break more, it compromises the very objective of summer assignments, that is, to enhance their education through having continuos learning instead of a complete break from school over the summer. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+03907607349a,E37D480CD473,"if teachers were to design summer assginments, they would be far more rigorous, but more importantly, they would be more beneficial for students for the upcoming school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3faa6e2960ae,E37D480CD473,"If student-designed projects are too easy, they end up simply becoming busy work. More difficult teacher-designed projects would challenge students, which may seem unappealing to many, however in order to grow academically, students need a stimulus to respond to. Moreover, students become stronger learners when they are forced to overcome challenges. These challenges could include: reading a book in a foreign language; reading a book that is longer than they would like and far more dense than they are used to; or having to perform operations with dificult mathematic equations, formulas, and concepts. Nevertheless these challenges will make students think heavily and help them become better educated. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ad550ade0093,E37D480CD473,"Although student-designed summer projects may appeal more to students, they will ultimately privide significantly less benefit to students' education, than teacher-designed projects would. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6af25071394b,E383A10B9A09,"One of the reasons is that there could be very sick poeple you go by and it might make you sick and sad to see that poeple are sick. Or it could be dead bodies floating in the ocean which might smell bad and make you sick to your stomach. Also feading farm life That will make you STINKY and smell bad. Also where does the ""waste"" goanyway do they throw it off the edge of the ship? or leave it there? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3463b74720de,E383A10B9A09,"I would not want to live there for two weeks it would be smelly nasty gross and disgusting. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+64db4e095223,E383A10B9A09,The ride would be long ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0feaadd59e19,E383A10B9A09,"also I would be very homesick i would miss my family my friends and pets. Also what happens if you crash you you float out to see or get rescued or drown or live on to tell the tale? What would happen to the animals? would THEY drown or THEY float away or They survive or you could get eaten by sharks!
+
+Or get impaled by a storms debrie or get very very SICK! or even worse someone kills you. Now I wouldnt want to be on THAT boat. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+950a1977d5ea,E383A10B9A09,For my second to final papagraph I would 1 Not want to get sick. 2 I would not wanna get killed. 3 I would not want to get impaled by debrie. 5 I would not want to get eaten alive. 6 I would not want to see sick or dead poeple on my trip 7 I would not want to crash and get stranded 8 I would not like o drown 9 I would miss my family friends and pets. 10 I would not like to eat rotten or smelly food or drinks. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de66966b7d89,E383A10B9A09,What would happen if you have to eat the animals then no more food for the poeple who need it and it would be cruel and you cant drink plain ocean water it needs to be distilled and run out of water faster. And if you fall over board you could get left behind or get saved and live to tell the tale or get thrown overboard or get eaten by animals or if the animals die then they get thrown over board and it would be wierd and gross seing animals being pulled along by the current. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+46a9a8683743,E383A10B9A09,"So in conclusion I would not want to join the ""Sea Cowboys"" 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+ef52f9cb9ef1,E4124ED1046C,Mars has aliens! ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a817561e89ea,E4124ED1046C,"Many people believe that the landform on Mars was created by aliens, but here at NASA we have found that landform was actually created naturally ",Position,Adequate,,,
+65daabb8d517,E4124ED1046C,"The landform is referred to as a Martian mesa, which is common in the region of Cydonia, but this has shadows that make it appear as if the figure has a face. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+25db096547cb,E4124ED1046C,"Some consipiracy theorists say that the form was actually created by aliens, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4dc2d023ac0c,E4124ED1046C,but why would we want to hide the fact that there is life on Mars when in reality it would benefit here at NASA. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+880fc3849401,E4124ED1046C,The landform is Martian mesa formation much like the Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb6dd472a294,E4124ED1046C,"The Martian mesa was naturally formed, but with its shadows, it looks much like a face. In 1998 Mars Global Surveyor was close enogh to actually see if there were any alien monuments and turns out that there wasn't any. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca9d464268b5,E4124ED1046C,"Here at NASA we recieved a lot of attention when the ""Face"" was discovered. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6b4d87d3919,E4124ED1046C,"The landform had no monumemts near it when looked at by the Surveyor. ""Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars."" People wanted there to be something because it would benefit us. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1545de8afe9,E4124ED1046C,"In the end, the landform was found to be a Martian mesa. There are many mesa's in the region of Cydonia and that's a part of how we found out how it was a natural landform. Also the Surveyour verified that there wasn't any other monuments near the landform. If there was any life on Mars we would want to tell the people so they can be intrested in the activity at NASA, but for now there has not been found any life activiy on Mars.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ef88e89e684b,E420A3813AE5,I believe there is life on mars. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3c05fb5627a7,E420A3813AE5,I believe there is life on mars because of the photos because of the talk around town. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a2044b2d0086,E420A3813AE5,"On May 24,2001 NASA sent Viking 1 in to outer space but what it found were still trying to figure out could there be life on Mars. The Viking sent back pictures of mars carved into it was a illusion of eyes nose and mouth so let me say again can there be life not just on earth but on Mars the question is still to be answerd. NASA says the have witness alot of things up that we dont know or could even imagin there could be life on every plant and if there is I know we all want to witness it one day. I know I am not the only one who would want to explore through out the box through out the earth but may I say the question is still out there for me for you for the future. So let that be known that you and me and what ever is out there are alike curious to seek and craving for advanture. You and me both will fly out of here hand by hand sister to brother to find whats on mars in the future qustion that is waiting to be answerd will be seen head smelled by the ones who are seeking that adventure to answer that qustion that we all what to know. Is there life on mars.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85ed9c4c6d46,E4559E81E304,"This passage is about a germany mom from the suburban pioneers where the commuting executives have gone before they given up their cars street parking , driveways also home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts for freiburg near the french and swiss borders vaubans streets are completely car free the main thoroughfare where the tram to downtown freiburg runs the few streets on one edge of the community ownership is allowed there are only two places to a larger park with alot of money you can buy a space with 40,000, with a home on the side. Vauban completed in 2006 is an example of a growing trend in rurope the united states and elsewhere to separte suburban life from auto use as a compnent of a movement called planning smart all of our development since world war ii has been centered on the car and that will have to change the guy david said of the transportation for america a fast growing coalition of hundreds of groups coaliton of hundreds of groups in the united states who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars thye said about the hybrid and things like that. In the united states the environmental protection agency is promoting car reduced communities and legislators are starting to act if cautiously many experts public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six year federal transportation bill to be approved this year mr goldberg said previous bills 80 percent of appropriations have 20 percetnt to other transport. Diesel fuel was blamed since france has tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline make up to 67 percent of vehicles in france compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western furope according  to reuters ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6cef3e344106,E4630B623165,"Have you ever wondered what someone else was feeling on the inside? With the introduction of the Facial Action Coding System; this allows you to do just that by having it interpate someone's facial expressions, and then having it respond back with a variety of emotions from that specific person. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+967c70ba0441,E4630B623165,The Facial Action Coding System should be enabled across the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+10d327e8d0bb,E4630B623165,the mechanism allows you to figure out what someone is feeling at a given time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b721ba43aad6,E4630B623165,it allows an instructor to make alternative lessons if their students are proven bored from FACS. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7c97ad41f73,E4630B623165,"Firstly, the FACS does not allows students to hide themselves and pretend to be someone they are not. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffe40238c826,E4630B623165,"The FACS will pick up emotions that a student is feeling and teachers, parents, and or consoulers will be able to get the help that that particular student aqquires. ""To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ""smiling"" politicain or celebrity isn't being truthful."" This same concept can work with students too. If a student is giving off a false emotion than that student really feels; the FACS can determine the actual emotion the student is feeling. If teachers and parents realize the actual feelings and emotions someone feels, he or she will be able to provide more comfort in the act of helping towards that individual. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+642f99b3d7e4,E4630B623165,"Secondly, the Facial Action Coding System can change the way lessons are tought to make them more encaging and exciting for students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4ca976a1011f,E4630B623165,"If the FACS picks up that students are bored out of their minds; instructors will be able to change the lesson for future students so that they are paying attention and actual learning from the lesson. ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" and ""then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" This example from the text illustrates that the FACS will have have a trememdous effect on students' learning capabilities in a good way because with the FACS; instructors can modify their lessons so that students can obtain information better and learn more from their class. If the students are learning more from classes with the effect of FACS; this world will have a brighter future because the students now across American are the world's future, and with brighter students comes a brighter future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b21e8f9b838,E4630B623165,"In conclusion, FACS should be incooperated in all classrooms nation wide because how many times are a kid did you tell you parents at the dinner table that you did not learn anything at school? With the FACS that topic at dinner can be changed because the FACS can modify lessons if the students are bored or confused so that students develop more information in a days work at school. The able to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is also valuble because if a student is struggling with mental problems, rather than being bored or confused, the FACS can detect what he or she is feeling and that particular student can get the help he or she needs to succeed in life. As one can see, the FACS would be an incredible improvement in all classrooms across American and over seas because with the effects of the FACS students will be able to learn and take away more from a lesson than before.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cf3c0541b2ca,E47590B3F2CF,"You should become a Seagoing Cowboy like me, Luke Bomberger! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+460e0be049d1,E47590B3F2CF,a Seagoing Cowboy gets to experience places from all over the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+312b60dc04f1,E47590B3F2CF,have a lot of freetime on the way back ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0564de6112e5,E47590B3F2CF,you also get to help people that are in need. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bcb8622e811,E47590B3F2CF,Get to explore places you've never been to! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+918a621fd53d,E47590B3F2CF,"Just take it from me, ""I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China"" That shows that you can see lots of places, but that isn't the best part! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+679dca5b7ed3,E47590B3F2CF,You also have a lot of free time on the way back from a trip. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a598dd8aa56,E47590B3F2CF,"When we unloaded all of the animals, ""The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helpes pass the time."" We enjoyed the rides back, but even that isn't the best part! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2154bd6a2540,E47590B3F2CF,The best part of being a Seagoing cowboy is helping people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cc9581b1330,E47590B3F2CF,"When I became a Seagoing Cowboy, ""It was 1945, World War ll was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA. UNRRA hired ""Seagoing Cowboys"" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d282f0d1e39,E47590B3F2CF,"Well, I hope that I convinced you into becoming a Seagoing Cowboy like me. It's everybody's world. Let's help save the people in it. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+68979f36b068,E4824CBFEEBD,Do you think we should put facial action coding system in our classroo ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e12bd8dd593,E4824CBFEEBD,I think using technology to read the emotions expressions in a classroom is a good thing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e3723b1f68f4,E4824CBFEEBD,"it tells you where your students are bord in class, see if they are mad in class, and tell someone is tired in the classromm. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a0e5f0892f8,E4824CBFEEBD,See if the someone is bord in class is a good thing because you can make the subject or class more fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c27368a78957,E4824CBFEEBD,"That will make the student pay more attention in class because they won't be messing or not paying attention in class any more. In paragraph 6 it says ""A classrom computer could recoginze when a student is becoming confused or bored."" What they meant by that is the computer would put a different lesson than instead making the student do the lesson being bord or confussed. That will help a lot of students because they are gonna learn more and get good grades. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0291e3d60382,E4824CBFEEBD,The facial action coding system could tell a person if they are tired because the computer can tell by their muscles. It will tell the teacher wich student is tired so they teacher can do something about it. It will help out a lot of the teachers from telling who's falling asleep. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2260fa420d4e,E49A2A338F6F,"If you're reading this article, I'm guessing you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy. It's an interesting job. It doesn't require any special skills or years and years of experience. You just have to know how to take good care of animals and not get seasick easily. It's not that hard. Read on; I'll show you why. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1bba46b567ec,E49A2A338F6F,There are a lot of great reasons to join the program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+117b57dc0170,E49A2A338F6F,"When I was a Seagoing Cowboy,(Yes, I was!) along with helping other countries get back on their feet, I got to see awe-inspiring things ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+291d8d2a27fc,E49A2A338F6F,such as the Acropolis in Greece and the Panama Canal on my way to China. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86cbb1e8e44b,E49A2A338F6F,Taking care of the animals wasn't that hard. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c32af821a47a,E49A2A338F6F,"Sure you had to clean the poop-ridden stalls and carry up heavy bags of oats, but the animals made great company. On rides back home, you could relax and play games with the rest of the crew. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bdf91e2a435,E49A2A338F6F,"Being a Seagoing Cowboy could be dangerous, too. Once, after making my hourly report to the captain, I fell down a slippery ladder and almost went overboard and died! Luckily I got away with only a broken rib and more caution. People in the countries we aided could've been hostile. Seas could've been violent. Storms could've broken our ship to bite-size pieces. Fortunately, none of that happened ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0cebae12dac7,E49A2A338F6F,most of my trips were safe ones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fcd58deac938,E49A2A338F6F,"When I was a Seagoing Cowboy, it opened up the world to me. I saw that the world wasn't all sunshine and rainbows, like the little me thought. The world was full of unfairness and was my job, everybody's job, to help stop it. I stepped up to do my part by joining the Seagoing Cowboys. Do your part. Join the Seagoing Cowboys program today. Make the world a better place, one cow at a time. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8a328859bcd5,E49CCE901992,I wouldnt use this Facial Action Coding System on students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f2085602fe9,E49CCE901992,it those enables computers to dentify humans emotions but not real ones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1562c0e0d27,E49CCE901992,"it just shows the human emmotions byt the expression but not the real emotion that the human is feelin, Mona Lisa's natural face might be like that but not because the Facial Action Coding System identified that she has several different emotions showing in that paint from Da Vinci means that she was for real feeling those emotions, I think that is just how her face is , because all the people in this planet have dufferent faces that we cant not even describe if they feeling this or that because there face is just like that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d14f5beb96c7,E49CCE901992,But sometimes its true the Facial Action Coding System might be true ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e66a57ded93b,E49CCE901992,Dr. Huang observed that Da Vinci has studied anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81f8bbe70b7d,E49CCE901992,"Dr. Huang predicts that it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2c811478d96a,E49CCE901992,I t says that the same technology can make computer animated faces more exoressive. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b47af8ede705,E49CCE901992,I believe that the Facial Action Coding System works perfectly good and does indentify humans expression like Dr. Haung said but not real emotion becasue the person can just be expressing some emotions but that doesn't mean they feeeling it that way.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eb989f6b962e,E4CE3E508B44,"The ""Face on Mars"" is really not a a face at all. In fact, it is simply a landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+503847ff7063,E4CE3E508B44,"There is no alien remains or anything like that. It sure does look like a face, but that was merely a coinsidence. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d7974989811d,E4CE3E508B44,"First of all, to prove this is a landform and not aliens is, there is only a face, no body ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7f45c533d85c,E4CE3E508B44,"If this really was aliens there would be a body to go along with this face. From the picture provided in the article, I can clearly see that there is a face and a fce only. Absolutely no body found. In fact, there is not even a bump or anything proving this has no body and aliens would most likely have a body if they have a head/face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4af4303d3653,E4CE3E508B44,"The second reason as to why this cannot be an alien is, if it was an alien NASA would have found more than one by now. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+471b64dfd905,E4CE3E508B44,"This landform was first discovered in 1976. That is a long time ago. If this truely was an alien that once had life, there would most definetly be more than one. But, there is not. There is only one. This is another reason proving this is not aliens, but just a landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42f79b60c6fe,E4CE3E508B44,"The third an final reason why this is nothing more than a landform, not aliens, in it would have been identified by now. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+78bc54f6b17a,E4CE3E508B44,"NASA would have came out and said it already. There is no way we can actually prove that is actually an alien. But, we have classified it as a landform. We even have other landforms on earth to compre it too. Many say it is equivalent to a butte or mesa(many things found in the American Mest). ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" Garvin says. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88ab1850ccc4,E4CE3E508B44,"In conclusion, this is not aliens. This is simply a landform. Even though it does look like a face we have supporting details that back up our argument. It is clearly not an alien. Everything needed to prove this is tight in this essay. I hope that now you have come to your senses and agree with me. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d413cdb21453,E4EC09FBBC69,"If i had to write an essay arguing whether the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable, it would be like this, i would say that it is really valuable ",Position,Adequate,,,
+90621690b2d4,E4EC09FBBC69,"because they are telling us what emotions really mean, what they can or just do for us and just why emotions are important to us, in a way that it really matters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c30ff1fe9c67,E4EC09FBBC69,"First, here are the real main reasons that they really matter and they are, First, its like when you are doing a test, you are really focused on it, you will get really stressed on it and might not know what to do at all and you might need help on it, so the computer could tell if you were stressed and that you didn't know waht to do at all. there are many reasons why and this second reason is its like when your science teacher is grading your lab assignment and you are with your partner and you might be just getting it done or just got it done right away or just maybe worked on it really slow and needed help, well the computer would be able to help you with that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc6567dfb878,E4EC09FBBC69,Some people might say that the (FACS) is not valuable ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b29c4a7895ca,E4EC09FBBC69,"and just isn't smart because it might not get the correct percent or because it might not do everything or just a few things wrong, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c78c401fe43d,E4EC09FBBC69,but that doesn't mean that also doesn't mean that it might do a lot of things right either. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e73ad4e0a002,E4EC09FBBC69,"The last thing that i am going to say that i am arguing that the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, is this, like if a computer knows if you are happy or sad, it would do this, it would pull up an ad one might be sad and then the other one would be exciting and just make you happy in a way that you didnt know that you could be happy about something, for example, like a bunch of puppies,cats, someone just getting there drivers license and then getting a new car, something like that. Bad and sad things would be like this, it would be like someone who smokes to much or someone who just passes away, just stuff like that, and i would just feel really bad for you and would just want to help you in any way that i could. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c9ef3467aa6,E4EC09FBBC69,So those aere the reasons that i would want a use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom that is valuable. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+419d1500ab31,E4FACBE9AC22,Are principle has decided to make all students participate in at least one extracurricular activity ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+822ca549c05a,E4FACBE9AC22,I think students should not have to do a extra activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d326f6fa8566,E4FACBE9AC22,some kids have other things to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca0c89a05286,E4FACBE9AC22,"it should be a praivlage to do a extra class because some kids dont get good grades, or they just dont want to ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+35ba72cc1c92,E4FACBE9AC22,"I think if you are failing a class you should focus on that grade and bringing it up and getting it to at least a C or B . I also think that kids that get in trouble shouldnt be allowed to because they didnt listen or did something they wasnt suppose to . Why give a kid this if they dont listen, they dont deserve to do something like this is they are being disrespectful or not listening. Students that do get good grades above a
+
+D ad F and arent disrespectful should be able to do this if they wanted to. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a9fd73ec24a,E4FACBE9AC22,"If students some students did this and some students didnt do this it would be easier on the teacher in that class because schools have a lot of kids, and if you was to split the whole school up into activities there is going to be 1 teacher and a lot of kids. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cbace205564e,E4FACBE9AC22,"Now yes you can put more than 1 teacher in the rooms but if you think about it teachers have to plan there classes and what they are going to do for the rest of the week , and some teachers dont have time because they have other things they need to do after school and in school. Like what if a teacher got sick the other teacher would be by its self with all those kids . Some kids should do this because they never have or never had experience with this type of stuff and some kids will try and take advantage to this and only do it to get out of doing other stuff, thats why i think this is not a good idea , ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60c848d71f9d,E570BB4A5B5B,I think the reason why they have advantages of limiting car usage cause all these changes ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ac04f1d682f0,E570BB4A5B5B,people who have stooped car commuting as a result of the recession may found less reason to resume the habit... ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34998c40880c,E570BB4A5B5B,differnt thing are converging which are suggest that we are witessing a long-term cultural shirt. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a3cd0f2c65d6,E570BB4A5B5B,another reason is that if that pattern persists they believe it will have a benfiicial implications for cabon emissions ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+afec862d7cac,E570BB4A5B5B,aslo the environment and they aslo they sayed it might have a negative implicatins for the car industry. and because the cash-srapped americans could not afford new cars and the unempolyed weren't going to work either and young people decreased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0b940ec9a0d0,E570BB4A5B5B,they had demographic shifts in the drving poulation suggest that the trrends may have accelerate it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b8b02898fa31,E570BB4A5B5B,the percentage had drop while older people are likey to retain there license as they age. Aslo like cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements and they had reserachers had pondering a fundamental ques:Has America passed peak drving?    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d19c141b74c,E5856BB0C34A,The face on Mars is actually just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+59261b6622c2,E5856BB0C34A,"The ""Face on Mars"" has became a pop icon, it has starrd in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows and even haunted grocerys tore checkout lines for 25 years. Its the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. "" It reminds me the morst of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" says Garvin. ""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44676c9e0a75,E5856BB0C34A,"When,
+
+NASA unveiled the image for all to see, the caption noted a ""huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth."" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.
+
+Though, When Mars Global Surveryor flew over the Cydonia for the first time, Michael and his Mars Obiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all
+
+For example: As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size."" ""So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see where they were."" The picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fae4566857e7,E5856BB0C34A,"Although, some people people think it was created by aliens or that few scientists believe the face was an alien artifact, but actually its just a natural landforms common around the American West.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4678c9dbe144,E595E218D423,Would you join a seagoing cowboys program? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+1d171d53a13c,E595E218D423,Just imagine how good of a idea this would be ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ffb8f3e0c9f,E595E218D423,you can visit many unique places ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24340aa23a4e,E595E218D423,experience adventures ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22652d3ea749,E595E218D423,there is travelling if you work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0449c8fa41ff,E595E218D423,you can see many unique things during the Seagoing Cowboys program ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32eb0385f90c,E595E218D423,"You can also visit unique things while traveling, and find unique stuff during this program. This proves that you should join this program. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dab7fcc97bc3,E595E218D423,you can experience adventures ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9960d221ca47,E595E218D423,You can experience adventures by going over the oceas. You can slso experience adventures by taking care of the animals. This is another reason why you should join Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+acb2cb30fb5b,E595E218D423,you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program becasue there is traveliling if you work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed2e4a6616c5,E595E218D423,"So you work to experience unique places and things. Also experience adventures and all you have to do is work a little bit. This is the final reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e6477ffd271,E595E218D423,"If you join this program it is a good idea because you can visit many unique places, experience advcentures, and and travelling if you work on the ship. So you should really consider joing this program. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7c18f0592868,E5B076EB95A7,Do you belive in aliens? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b34f63cff3d0,E5B076EB95A7,the face was just natural landforms ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8d14bff6636b,E5B076EB95A7,there is no such things as aliens! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e43ae2d6ed4a,E5B076EB95A7,"For example the text says"" a shadowy likeness of a human face."" This example show that likeness isn't always certain you have to be absolutley sure before you start making claims about what the picture is showing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+22c027125e60,E5B076EB95A7,"Another reason why the alien story is real is because ,no one officially approved it. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7854eccb6c00,E5B076EB95A7,"They only took pictures of the face.
+
+No one went down on mars to examine or observe the face. An example for this would be that the passage says"" only this one had unusual shadws that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh"". This example shows that if it looks like a Egyptian Pharaoh how would the aliens know about it? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ad5a6bbb38f,E5B076EB95A7,"The next reason why the alien myth isnt true is because in the passage it says the word""illusion"" the word illusion means something that you can see but is not there. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a944330135b8,E5B076EB95A7,"For example in the tex it states that "" formed shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth"". This example shows that an illusion may seem real but it is not real. You have to make sure that your facts are reliable and your resources are reliable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ef731039ba2,E5B076EB95A7,"Finally, why people say that the landfrom was formed by aliens is because it
+
+"" appered in books, magazines and radio talk shows--- even haunted grocery store for 25 years"". ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a6dad5a281b9,E5B076EB95A7,They don't know just because this thing goes publice dosen't mean it is true. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3595cc99ffd1,E5B076EB95A7,"For example"" Some people thimk that it is bona fide evidence"". The people that think taht it is bona fide evidence did they do any research or did they just rely on what the social media says ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c87ed3d2e96,E5B076EB95A7,In conclusion you should believe that the face is a natural landform is because aliens isn't real. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fbd066d5ebf2,E5F4C8EB99A4,I think the technologhy to read students emotional spreeions is a great idea ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f87dab7e1afe,E5F4C8EB99A4,because it can tell you if you sad happy angery disgusted or fear. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+64fdacfdf142,E5F4C8EB99A4,On the Mona Lisa smile it tells you how are you felling when you are looking at it. That ehy people and student go look at the Mona Lisa smile panting to go see how are they filling. In the pragh 1 it says that shes 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusred 6 percent fearful. Dr Huang asked if they can calculate emotions like math homework and how can a computer recongnize the subtle facial. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30a526341f5e,E5F4C8EB99A4,In this process it begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model on the face. Dr huang relies on the work of the pyschologists as Dr Paul Eckman creator of FACS the did the test on Eckman and he had happiness surprise anger disgust fear and sadness. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intened to bring a smile to eveybody face when you go and see the painting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f0c7da34d1a,E5F4C8EB99A4,Making a happy face was a great idea because its bring people happyniess to you becacuse its does not making you angery or sad. that why it was a grat idea about this painting.       ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24d124ecbd7e,E609C36EC225,In the article the author tells that even though there is alot of dangerous challenges in exploring venus and that he is willing to face them challenges. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a20694480a35,E609C36EC225,"In paragraph 2 the author starts out saying how venus is earth's twin and that venus is the closest planet to us in terms of density and size. In the body paragrpah i am going to talk about the challenges author states in the story about venus, NASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfcebdcb5a22,E609C36EC225,Some challenges the author says that venus is thowing at us ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4c24ff6c3950,E609C36EC225,"venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that is covering the planet. In paragraph the the author also states that venus is on average 800 degrees Fahrenheit, that is hotter than mars and mars is the closest planet to the sun. The author also states that the atmosherpic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. If the earth had that muh atmospheric pressure than there would be no one left on this planet because that is so much pressure that it can crush a submarine. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes to land on its surface. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6909674c64cf,E609C36EC225,Some thing that NASA is saying is that there only possible solution for how hot it is and how much pressure is in the air is that with these hostile conditions that venus shoudl allow scientists to float above the fray. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1e877d8413b,E609C36EC225,"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the rolling Venusain landspace, with that venus would avoid the unfriendly group conditions by staying up and out of the way. The temperatures over the ground would still be 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. These conditons are not easy, but thye are surviable for human's ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea7aec34d224,E609C36EC225,how we can solve the high pressure and high temperature. The first way we can solve these conditions are if we started having people go and live on venus and took some other living organisms with them. The second way we could solve it is if we found away to connect venus to earth and that would take away all ot the problems. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4fd075b89cfe,E609C36EC225,"I would have to agree more with NASA's ideas on how to solve the problems venus is dealing with. i agree with the author it is just i don't think his idea's will wokr as well. One day i think we will be able to live on Venus and have it connected to Earth. In this essay i told you about about the challenges author states in the story about venus, NASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ae9adef651a2,E60A91172B20,Luke should use these reason's to convince other people. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7e611c857e1c,E60A91172B20,The program helps with people in need ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57bf837cb252,E60A91172B20,"people around the world that need supplies, and livestock. The Seagoing Coyboys program is a program for helping other's.
+
+The first reason is the program helps with people in need. Luke and Don go help people and sign up for program. Example-
+
+Luke helped Katie's farm for checking the animals every night. Then he slipped and cracked his ribs so he coudn't work for a couple days. He also took care of cattle while on board. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b85d608deb8c,E60A91172B20,Luke going around the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+48cb51f8b780,E60A91172B20,"He went to many parts of Europe. In Greece he got drafted with the military. He went to China to help animals with crossings. In the Pacific and atlantic ocean he took care of animals, while going to Europe. There were alot things to do. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1eb8083941a3,E60A91172B20,Luke going around and giving supplies ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc3d4eeb2fd6,E60A91172B20,In the first paragraph he worked a two- part job. Then when going to Europe he gave cattle to people or farmers. He probably gave them food and water. The reason is because is the end of WWII and buildings are down. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9ee653bd06a,E60A91172B20,"The Seagoing Cowboys program is a program for helping others. To sum marize the reasons. The program helps with people in need, the program goes around the world, and the program helps with livestock and supplies. Luke did a great thing to help with the world. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7fd8d8cbd821,E60EB5C35194,I think that the use of the technolohy should not be used ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2f889898f95b,E60EB5C35194,because then parent would be complaining how it is not fair for a teacher or students to know her sons/daughters expression. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0959b2e35e2,E60EB5C35194,Also I personally think that we shouldn't allow them because then teachers would always be focused on the kids that aren't as happy and are confused on the work or lesson they are learning. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5cb6cd9c8065,E60EB5C35194,I also think that it would also be a good idea for the whole school because if a student is to shy to speak up and they dont know how to do something then the teacher can talk to him/her after class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2aec574339e6,E60EB5C35194,I think that using this technology will be to much too and the school will have to use millions of dollars just to buy some for a whole class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9942706bd811,E60EB5C35194,"I know this becuase the author says ""Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode mocode Mona Lisa's smile. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e833a9c61ea1,E60EB5C35194,Then they show us how we can do it at home and how we can make use smile or happy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+39df25e1b0b5,E60EB5C35194,"In the artical is states ""According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. (""Putting on a happy face"" actually works"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f205af7c048,E60EB5C35194,So at the end of the day I personally don't think we schools should have this type of technogoly and be more focused on other technologys like finger print sign in or school resources. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3b00ef1fd4c2,E61D1C3EC9DD,"Do you think aliens exsist? The face has been said to be a natural landform or made by aliens. The face has been told from different perspectives. Conspiracy theorists thinks NASA wants to hide the face, when they really dont. There's different stand points for different topics.
+
+The Face on Mars is a mystery because we dont know if the face is there or is it shadows. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b96b4e395dc4,E61D1C3EC9DD,In my opinion I think that the face is a natural landform like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7ce4df80b35d,E61D1C3EC9DD,"the face has also been seen as a pop icon, it has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, and radio talk shows. Defenders of the national budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. Maybe there is life maybe there's not who knows for sure. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d4dddbfe7115,E61D1C3EC9DD,"Eighteen long years after Viking missions, we sent up the Global Surveyor. Once the it was in place for a good shot we took it ten times which were sharper than the viking photos. After the photos were posted on the web there was no congergations about aliens anymore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4ed24750cf7,E61D1C3EC9DD,It was proven to be a natural landform after all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0683c710a4f,E61D1C3EC9DD,The Face on mars is located at 41 degrees north martian lattitude where it was winter in April '98--a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. People still thought that it was an alien making that was hidden in the clouds. The team got another great look at it with the clearest view ever on a summer day and snapped a photo. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38f14f8ab951,E61D1C3EC9DD,The photo actually showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb255ff59a93,E61D1C3EC9DD,"In my opinon I believe the Face is real. Others might argue that its still something crated by aliens. Especially sense it was clearified as a butte or mesa. No matter what its an opinon based topic that you can argue about all day. The real question is what do you think?
+
+In conclusion there has been plenty of research and examinations on the Face of Mars. I still think that the Face is real, others might think differently. This topic can go both ways in opinon wise. Think wise about this topic. Consider talking about it with coleagues and come up with a conclusion for this topic. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9820693cb4b4,E627C066A0F1,I think its true because some computers now have facial scan recognition but they cost a arm and a leg to buy but i dont think its worth it to buy a computer that cost a arm and a leg because if something goes wrong with the computer their will be no refunds but their should be refunds because they could probably sell u a broken or damaged computer. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+321ee92e5700,E627C066A0F1,"Next: do think it would be a good idea to make a computer thats u can only access with your face because now a days people tend to steal stuff that doesnt belong to them like for example i had a friend who tried to steal my headphones one day but i had officer force her to give them back but when she gave them back the were broke.
+
+Conclusion: i think that mona lisa probably was a hard picture to face scan because there were so many differnt copys of the original paintning but im pretty sure the real painting is in a museum heavinly gauarded by people with heavy artilllery and grenades and army men with truck but inconclusion if your a great painter do your best because one day u might a famouse painter like Leanardo da Vinci or bettter   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+893157472a6b,E66C66D98801,"It was me and my other scientist friends in the lab discussing the ''The Face on Mars'' I told them it was just a enormous rock that was two miles long that's all we usullaly see things like this and they kept responding it does have a mouth, head, and eyes so what should we think. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+da9e8c0b1e44,E66C66D98801,All the scientist now believes that the face is an alien artifact but it is not and here is why. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+44a508955156,E66C66D98801,"In May 24,2001 twenty five years ago when it happen. Our sister ship took a picture of a shadowy likeness of a human face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+beb0ae076161,E66C66D98801,There's not an actual human face on the planet Mars then I told them there are two keywords likeness and shadowy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb3130f28457,E66C66D98801,"Then my friend Ben said a few days later NASA unveiled the image , but then I quote it was a huge rock formation which rembles a human head formed by shadows giving illusion of human parts. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+111e5c046b58,E66C66D98801,"Then in April 5 1998, when Mars Global Surveyour flew overv Cydonia for the first time and there people took ten times better images and said it was just a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c3e71673c6e,E66C66D98801,There was no alien monument after all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fa5c1d7f4fc,E66C66D98801,"Then my friend Ben started to understand until his friend Jeff said April,1998, a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet . The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy, white clouds to see the face. They say they were alien markings were hidden by haze. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e69022bdae4b,E66C66D98801,Finally I told him that it was just a big old rock with shadows covering it. And other scientist say it is just another enormous rock. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d21f92575732,E686584E5508,"Eh, its cool, sorta but knowing me I really dont care about this facial action coding thing. I wanna find out the mood of the picture on my own. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3ccc6efaf281,E686584E5508,"But its a cool thingy, the fact that you can find out what the person in a painting is feeling is insane. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6199927b7d4b,E686584E5508,"As Dr. Huang says in paragraph 4 ""the facial expression for each emotions are universal,"" ""even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression."" and that you can also reproduce a smile is weird ( I never knew that was a thing).But yea FACs can show you what your mood(s) are in a picture just by scanning your facial parts. Muscles called orbiculariaris make crows feet around your eye, but in a false smile. the mouth is strectched sideways using zygomatic major and a different muscle, the riorius. So all the muscles can get the coding to scan your face and it'll tell you the percentage of the mood that you are in whether you're sad, mad, happy, bored, it will tell you all of that jazyy stuff. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a2ceb71affe,E6B9DA32FE13,Studying Venus could lead us to a lot of stuff. There are many details we could get out of studying Venus ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e624faecd8db,E6B9DA32FE13,"Even though visiting Venus could be dangerous to visit, but it would also be very interesting. Venus has a lot going on. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+52461d89fddd,E6B9DA32FE13,"Venus is planet in our solar system. At one point in time, Venus could have been like Earth. There are features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is our nearest option of planetery visit. Vistiting Venus could and would be very dangerous to visit. Venus has high pressure and lots of heat. There are erupoting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes. Studying why Venus does this could to lead to a lot. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adaea2e8b2d3,E6B9DA32FE13,It could tell us about how Venus works and how it was created. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25d42207c67b,E6B9DA32FE13,"Venus is a very hot planet. If a blimp was 30 miles above Venus, the temperture could still reach the blimp. That is not survivable for humans ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4e2114a00d5,E6B9DA32FE13,Studying Venus on how it is so hot could solve a lot and tell us more about the planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c115c3271422,E6B9DA32FE13,"To study Venus, scientists would need samples of rock, gas, or anthing else from Venus. On the other hand, there has been spacecrafts to land on Venus, but they only would survive for a couple of hours. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+495de337e424,E6B9DA32FE13,"In conclusion of visiting Venus, it would be dangerous. It would also be very interesting. Knowing there could have been life on Venus is pretty cool. We need to find out a way to get close to Venus. We need samples of Venus on Earth.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c7d1b26c96b,E6F8E5374615,"The story about ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" describe how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enable computers to indentify humans emotion by writing a essay arguing weather the use of this technology or to read the emotional expression ? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9cec85a25790,E6F8E5374615,Will I think by using this technology if it bring a smile to my face while it shows how much this computer can do. Then I might have to get it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1793006d54b6,E6F8E5374615,Like if the computer no if im happy or sad in my emotion then thats a be a good feeling I dont know why but it will ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1cbe8ca86f8b,E6F8E5374615,A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aed606d9d926,E6F8E5374615,"So if you confused on something the computer could help or figure it out for you . I think its good because if the teacher is helping another students work the computer could help the kids or whoever. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+431236a4580a,E6F8E5374615,So I think it will be good for students to get a smart computer like that so when you do need help like that or feeling disgusted or fearful the computer will help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+578326dc7e5e,E6F8E5374615,Like on her last asignment she could feel not knowing how to do things .Then you can calculate emotions like the math homework . In the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face in if you dont know how to work a app it will show you . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+87d287621c10,E6F8E5374615,But one reason why I dont know about it because one day you can be mad in not let no one know . Or want somebody to know whats going on with you. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1dc269da78ed,E6F8E5374615,So I think thats probably one reason . Then you might not want help or want people seeing your emotion even the teacher. so thats the reason I probably would'nt get on the computer for that reason or some people probably just dont like the setting to it or probably want think its useful.. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e4968c139e3,E6F8E5374615,But last I think its valuable in someways in school or at home . Sometimes people dont know whats wrong with they body. They can get right on the computer in so the computer could tell them like your despress or things like thats ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+05e2aa751b15,E6F8E5374615,I think its a good learning envoirment for the kids in grown ups . So thats some reason why I thi nk its valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1005c7fd3386,E7111F690B98,I agree with the principal and most people just hang around and dont do any work ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec593f9535ef,E7111F690B98,Kids need to start being more happy and play sports and enjoy life ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d54b7e04f33,E7111F690B98,"At certain schools around the world Students act bad and just act up in general at school, and teachers dont seem to do things about it. If kids played sports more the school would gain a good reputaion. Sports are always fun, more people need to get there gets in sports like how the schools wants them too
+
+I believe that we should have all schools make kids certain sports, in certain times of the day. Like In elementary school you have gym after a class. We should tell parents that would want there kids to do activities that they would enjoy. If we had Students playing sports everyday then lots of people would be happy, plus who doesn't like to have fun once in awhile ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e984f7454562,E7111F690B98,If you wanna get on to the yearbook you need to be good in class and have good grades. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa921547f1af,E7111F690B98,"If you do good things like help the teacher out they might take a picture and post you on there, saying something like ""This person helped me do something difficult"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d5b9dbdcc532,E7111F690B98,"In order to be a student councilor, you need to understand others in a way that you can help them if they need it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a283dbe167e3,E7111F690B98,Also you need to be a decent person and very understanding. Some kids may come if they need someone to talk to or are having trouble at home. As a student councilor you have very many responsabities such as caring and helping others when they need you. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a3eeb350673,E7111F690B98,In our future we should all be happy and enjoy life. Schools should let students play sports and be a councilor or be in the year book. Parents should let there kids be a little more free. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b1159451e9f4,E71135F11EE0,Do you think its is a good idea to limit car usage? Well i do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ed5a128c27e,E71135F11EE0,more people now a days just have completely stop caring about the enviornment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+593eca4d56dd,E71135F11EE0,I say this because more and more people are getting these big trucks and they are not realizing that when that truck starts it is letting out bad gases that harms our atmosphear. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f95d7ee6baba,E71135F11EE0,I read that people are now getting fines in Columbia because of there cars and right now i think that's a good idea ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e87b718694d,E71135F11EE0,"people are just down right lazy and they need to get up and go exercise, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+33f4634900c1,E71135F11EE0,"president Obama has abitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse gas emission. I know that it will work out because I read that peopel think that america is pass the car age or what ever and that more and more people are starting to do whats right and start walking and riding bikes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d365a68f7af4,E71135F11EE0,"Now I have also read that Car compinies are suffering from that one day without cars thing because i think they fear that people might love the day without cars so much,that they just might stop buying them. Car componies are also suffering because I read that more and more people are becoming unemployed or they just cant affored it so they take alternet ways to get to where they have to go and they just dont worry about it. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f5b74cfef88e,E71135F11EE0,These are some of the reasons why i think it is a good idea that we should limit the usage in this world because there are so many pro's and cons on why its a good/bad idea.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f5f10c0a1ad7,E743F9AC8BBE,The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ba92da432154,E743F9AC8BBE,"It is valuable because in this passage ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" in paragraph six it gives the example of computers more specefically classroom computers and what could be possible for education some years down the road to improve students learning ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f63c3d3b9be9,E743F9AC8BBE,"In paragraph six we get evidence from ""Dr. Huang"" telling us how this could possibly be like a good human instructor like a teacher. The evidence proving this comes from ""Dr. Huang"" himself he says ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" basically ""Dr. Huang"" is saying of course down the road in the future a classroom computer can recognize students emotion and make constant changes to the students lesson on the computer to make a effective lesson like an actual human teacher. Thus proving that this technology to read a students expressions in a classroom is valuable. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1341fa0e788,E743F9AC8BBE,Another example proving that the use of this technology to read a students expressions in the classroom is valuable because in education there is alot of classes and alot of technology classes you can chose from one of the many technology based classes is Web Design ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee77007ee0ba,E743F9AC8BBE,"Again in paragraph six we could see a huge increase in technology more specfically animated faces. For instance in paragraph six we get evidence of how the same technology can make computer animated faces alot more expressive. Here is evidence ""The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-"" again proving how this technology to read the emotions of students in class is actually valuable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36c1e1e6f56e,E743F9AC8BBE,Another piece of evidence proving this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because in fact there are colleges out there that do offer video game based classes this could be another advantage ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+528f6b73ec5b,E743F9AC8BBE,"It is an advantage because video games are technology and since colleges are offering classes based on videogames this could really increase the learning atmosphere for each and everyone of those students who take that course. A piece of evidence would also again be found in paragraph six where it states ""The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for videogames"". This is proving that this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom or a videogame course in this case is valuable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af7c013c81f7,E743F9AC8BBE,Another piece of evidence is how we first found this technology back in paragraph one the very end of it we get some background information on how this technology was found. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+584cc2aac7a8,E743F9AC8BBE,"We get the evidence that this sofware is the latest discovery from ""Prof. Thomas Huang""
+
+of ""Beckman Institute for Advanced Science"" at the ""University of Amsterdam"". Just knowing that Professor Thomas Huang may not be a student but is teaching this software to his students in classroom is for sure valuable. We even get this really nice piece of evidence
+
+""Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate"". This is saying Huang and his colleague are making this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in classrooms is valuable. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8682487528bc,E743F9AC8BBE,"In conclusion the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is super valuable from videogames, professors to classroom computers and even just improving being able to read facial expressions is important because after all most of the human communication is nonverbal meaning not talking it is just simply ""emotional communication"". Also it says in the very begining that this new revolutionary software has promising applications for a good ammount of industries. Proving that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable thus improving the already flourshing education of all the students who take grasp of this. Leading on to a brighter and better future for everyone in the world. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7265766c3e35,E76B78A22B99,I am a scientist at NASA my name is Jeff. There is a face on mars and people think its by aliens well I know its not by aliens. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e361e3f169af,E76B78A22B99,It is just a natural landform on mars its nothing big it wasnt made by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6b3be41da737,E76B78A22B99,and a lot of people think its by aliens and then a lot of people agree with me also. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b7153581b318,E76B78A22B99,This face on mars is a natural landform anything can happen on a planet that we have'nt been on yet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+921ab6d29b67,E76B78A22B99,. We do not know what this planet is capble of and whats on the planet of mars. Well I think that it wasnt made by aliens becuase it gets more noticable by the years pass then it dissappers in a different year. Well Im sure our planet looks different from space in different years. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2a5bc3fd9dc,E76B78A22B99,Why would aliens even want to put a face on the planet. Im sure if there was aliens on mars they would'nt be carving a face on there own planet ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ff73728f9b01,E76B78A22B99,Im sure there living there life on mars not knowing we even exsit thats if there is aliens on there. They wouldnt what anything with us if they did I think they would have made more signs then just two dots and a straight line and they would have made the face more noticable and it dissapears after a couple of years that is probbaly of there is wind or something that might have blew away they face ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49e56db72b60,E76B78A22B99,. We had our best people look into it and they think its a landform to they got pictures and eveidence that its just a regular landform! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2582a6b116e9,E7A3DBC919C1,The technology to read students emotions isn't a very useful thing. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a868bad0872,E7A3DBC919C1,Not everyone wants you to know how they feel when it comes to their emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0ac3318914a,E7A3DBC919C1,This could be useful to determine pictures and see how they were feeling at the time of the picture. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+949ff8fe7f19,E7A3DBC919C1,Most people wouldn't want others to know how they feel somedys. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27c5290d2fd1,E7A3DBC919C1,FACS which is a way to identify human emotion can become used in the wrong way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f561eed0b449,E7A3DBC919C1,Some people could use it on others who don't want other people knowing how they feel. Some people just want to keep their emotions to themselves so that others can't see or know them. This could become a privacy issue when it comes to how people use this device. They could use it on people that don't want them to know what they're feeling. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb9628a5e8b9,E7A3DBC919C1,"This device could become useful to see how people felt in movies, books, or even paintings. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+eb485fc96d79,E7A3DBC919C1,"I don't think that humans should use it on other humans unless they had permission to do so. When people hear about this device they may think that it isn't worth it, but it could be useful when it comes to things that happened long ago. Seeing other peoples emotions can be harmful to them unless they allowed you to do so. A lot of people want to hide their emotions and keep them to themselves. Emotions are something that can be shared or they can be kept away inside somebody. They can tell people or they can hide it, either way its up to them. This is why this device isn't helpful to the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa396d9342e0,E7A3DBC919C1,Again it may be helpful with things back then ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+18511a99d97d,E7A3DBC919C1,"but seeing peoples emotions right now, it isn't something that is very useful to the world today ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a020258c70ce,E7A3DBC919C1,Todays society wouldn't like this product very much because if they wanna know a persons emotions all they have to do is ask. They don't need a fancy device to tell them how that person is feeling. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39f6b641b7b7,E7A3DBC919C1,Besides some people dont want you to know hoe they feel one day or maybe at all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2f71bef33de,E7A3DBC919C1,Peoples emotions can be kept to themselves and shouldn't be told to someone with a device instead they could just ask. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+489384839a77,E7A3DBC919C1,So this device isn't helpful to the world today. In today's society people dont want others knowing their emotions. If they want to know they can ask and if that person wants to tell them then they will. This device is an invasion on peoples privacy because not everyone wants you to know their feelings. This device wouldnt be used by very many people in the world today.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+608fcff2a048,E7C5E12F4E84,I am against technology being able to read students emotional expressions. We shouldn´t have computers telling exacly how our students are feeling. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6e5dc20addfc,E7C5E12F4E84,"Some things are personal and some kids might not want other kids to know if there feeling sad, mad, or happy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+476e49527f46,E7C5E12F4E84,"In paragraph one it tells the percentages on Mona Lisa, that going way to far with personal space and thought. Some things are meant to be un said and if a teacher asks you in class how you felt about that certain situation they can tell if your lying or not, and that´s your choice if you want to express that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9d2d9bccc0f,E7C5E12F4E84,Students could be bullied if other kids didn´t like there opinion about something. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6877d5caced,E7C5E12F4E84,"Even if something made a kid feel happy that something bad happened to another student like personal thoughts , that could be blown out of context. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59bc86c558b1,E7C5E12F4E84,"Even though you may not have the brightest look on your face doesn´t mean your not happy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+caf2aefb4c16,E7C5E12F4E84,"like thousand of kids walk around school with bleh looks and they may actually be happy but just showing that expression, but the computer would read it as sad or mad. Computers are already taking over a lot of things, but when it comes to humans we should´t need a computer to tell us how were feeling. Computers and technology aren´t 100% right, only you would know exactly how your feeling. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b974ab734ed,E7C5E12F4E84,"In conclusion computers shouldn´t be allowed to read students expression. In paragraph 5 Dr. Huang says it isn´t hard to tell whether a friend is feeling happy or sad you should be able to read that, so why exactly do we need a computer doing that? Some things us humans should be able to figure out because its our body and we know how it works. Therefore we shouldn´t need technology going pass our personal boundaries and telling us how we feel . It would just cause more conflict and more wasted money on things we ca just figure out ourselves. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c49868fe5507,E88DDA2FB4EA,The author supports the idea of exploring venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+659bde37f826,E88DDA2FB4EA,"because Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth. However, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f41ab9532c0c,E88DDA2FB4EA,"Often referred to as Earth's ""twin,"" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challengin are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such a enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5844824bee4,E88DDA2FB4EA,"
+Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because off the insight to eb gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by danger and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92b31e3e93a5,E8C1C58F8A0A,"In the introduction, the author is describing Venus and explaining how ""The Evening Star."" Is the nickname, but beyond that- paragraph 1 and 2 wasn't explaining why you should pursuit it. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8998b1d5d06c,E8C1C58F8A0A,"However one statement that does in paragraph 2 is ""Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+13de02fe5479,E8C1C58F8A0A,"Meaning it's not that far away to reach. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5febd3d36d2,E8C1C58F8A0A,"Yet one paragraph that is arguing with wanting to go to Venus is ""Each previous mission was unamed, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fa6b118583d6,E8C1C58F8A0A,However one statement from paragraph 4 that shows that they wanna go to Venus is ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7b9894916bee,E8C1C58F8A0A,"""Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system."" This paragraph also claims that Venus was most likely covered with oceans and still supported different forms of life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+329347a08992,E8C1C58F8A0A,"In paragraph 5 though, one of the statement claims ""not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."" Stating that Venus's climate and other factors made being there a pain, but again, it's for sure possible.
+
+In paragraph 5 as well it says ""(NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f3c46331e860,E8C1C58F8A0A,"Going a little further, paragraph 6 just explains that to understand more about Venus, that they would have to get much closer, and also describes how scientists are working on innovations that would make the tech and gear that is necessary better and able to last longer.
+
+They are doing so because they can't understand as much when they have no evidence ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+966bcb7f8d70,E8C1C58F8A0A,"Paragraph 7 has no claims on how you should go to Venus whatsoever, but instead it is talking about older tech used in the 1800s. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+944a34e5f150,E8C1C58F8A0A,"However in Conclusion, in paragraph 8 they stated ""Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."" Another line that they used is ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubt. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f1515d350ad5,E8C1C58F8A0A,"that no matter how many risks just so happen to be in Venus, perhaps if we were able to get there worry free, we'd come back with things we didn't know from before. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f1478e207a1c,E8DD7458130E,"This article talks about ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"". In this article we learn about a machine that can that detects or identifies your emotions, whether sad, happy, angry, confused, or surprised this machine does it all. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fb5769782010,E8DD7458130E,"This machine found out that she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This software is the latest innovation from Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. This software actually calculates peoples emotions like a math homework. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles, Movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a07c78d1946,E8DD7458130E,"Dr. Huang observes that facial expression for each emotions are universal even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression. Using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting he different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions as in da Vinci's masterpiece. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45c2c41129e7,E8DD7458130E,"In fact, we human perform this same impressive calculation everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried and so on. Yet Dr huang obsereves that artists such as Da vinvi studied human anatomy to help paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89ad3b38589a,E8DD7458130E,". His new computer software stores similar anaomical information as electronic code. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+240e5e96c824,E8DD7458130E,"I think this machine could be very useful in different situations like in offices, classrooms and even in personal homes ",Position,Adequate,,,
+add63a6d46a6,E8DD7458130E,I would like it in classroom because it could tell whether students have a problem with something. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d98822ca86d,E8DD7458130E,"I think this software could be a great thing for a classroom. Imagine a classroom computer that knows when you are happy or sad. For exapmle, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow it. But if you frown, the next ad will be something different. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01e4e4c296d5,E8DD7458130E,"A classroom computer could recognize when a student s becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a25d6f76f0d,E8DD7458130E,"Then it could modify a lesson, like an effective human instructor. The same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. I think if a computer is able to do this it will make boring or less interesting classes more interactive, fun and understandable which makes students more willing to learn and will understands things better. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb9a7b3e3a0d,E8DD7458130E,I think this new upcoming software will help make class more interesting and fun for students because if this software can read someone's emotions it wil surely know when a students is getting bored or if a student is confused. I think the will make students learn more. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d778d63c3bce,E91C501B7AFA,The author did really well by being specific and being descriptive about Venus. There was a lot of detail which made it long and a little boring. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a0f25ee042a1,E91C501B7AFA,"Not everyone wants to read about Venus, but it is a nice planet but when you are being forced to it's not the best choice. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef6c888ea73e,E91C501B7AFA,"Things that the authro did good on was being very descriptive. Also, gave very many reasons to do a project over Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dbb46984b44c,E91C501B7AFA,"The author was doing very good about giving as many facts as a student would need in order to do a whole project over. They also gave some good detail about how it's been around 3 decades since someone has tried going to Venus. They have an enormous amount of facts. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c0457a1cc4c,E91C501B7AFA,Something they could improve on is not make it as lengthy. This story would be very helpful if I had a project over Venus but it's a bit long to do anything else with. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12492b5dd850,E91C501B7AFA,Granted there are a lot of facts but I would personaly put some opinion in it and make a little paragraph about what you would do if you went to Venus. Make it a tiny bit more interesting if you put something other than just straight facts. I strongly reccomend putting in some opinion in the next story. For example put some opinion on maybe what you think about a certain fact. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b453f9949059,E91C501B7AFA,"
+This overall was a great story and the author did a great job writing it. There are a few thing I would do different to grab the readers attention and try and keep it. The story doesn't keep my attention but it may to someone that loves since or maybe even Venus, but I'm not that person. Anyways great story overall just a few nit picks I wanted to point out. I can't wait for a new one next year!      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+936eaaaa27d4,E9363204BCEF,"Generic_Name declared all his students must participate in one or more extracurricular activities. It's not a choice for his students to not participate. What the school's students do have a choice over is which activity they want to participate in. People will agree or disagree with his decision, but it will expose students to new views or angles of what they want to do or enjoy. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+33067ac5de9f,E9363204BCEF,"Students should participate in extracurricular activities because it benefits their social, mental and physical health. ",Position,Effective,,,
+992f978cee31,E9363204BCEF,Exposing students to exciting and beneficial activities can open up a new passion! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb2168ba7da5,E9363204BCEF,"Instead of lazing over homework or moping around their house, children can be brighter and happier to get things done. When students are in an environment they enjoy, it can motivate them and brighten up their day. No one likes sitting in a classroom for seven hours. If students have something exciting to look forward to at the end of the day or the day after, it will push them to get their work done to participate in what they want to do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a39fe685cd34,E9363204BCEF,", extracurriculars give students a reason not to stay home and isolate themselves. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+29042b57199a,E9363204BCEF,"A bunch of children just want to go home and binge shows or movies if they'v got nothing to go to. Especially, when they are bored. School can cause stress, so they'll want to wind down by getting sucked into their electronics. Instead, finding something as relaxing as watching a movie, like drawing, making music, reading, etc. is better for their eyes and won't cause eye induced headaches. But, the only way for them to realize that's what they like, is to expose them to it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6335a3e75c26,E9363204BCEF,if a student were to choose an outdoor activity it would include benefiting their mental health. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32aa44d2c912,E9363204BCEF,"Fresh air and natural light is good for everyone and wakes people up. Generally, unnatural light causes headaches, tiredness, and is known for making people lose concentration. Being indoors also can cause a trapped or caged feeling because it would be hard to get up and move without disrupting a working environment. Indoor lighting tends to feel dull and drab, not bright and happy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4c2267b1650a,E9363204BCEF,When students have a closer similarity (their extracurricular activity) it can give them something in common. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4cc11e2363f6,E9363204BCEF,"Having something in common helps people socialize and discuss that topic. Then, children can make friends over things they both like to do and discuss, plus they'll be able to work together on the topic. If the topic they made friends over was a sport, they can become better friends because teammates have to rely on each other during games. Having a sport as an extracurricular activity also gets kids exercising and it's not always a bad thing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ddf76450e20,E9363204BCEF,"extracurricular activities are good for students. They allow children to maintain their physical health and grow their social circle. Extracurriculars can also benefit their mental health and get kids excited to get done with the day at school. It also gets them out of the house, but still getting to relax or have fun!  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2b2a0d59a2ce,E97670F90297,So in the storu it talks about going to diffrenet places in our solar system so in the story it talks about how some plants can actually hold humans in it cuase it has the same things this planet has but not all of them. So they where talking about a planet in particular venus a planet right next to us we can have a spaceship go there. they talk about some of venus things like how hot it is the planet reaches 800 degrees. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+cca996d004c0,E97670F90297,Can we go to a diffrenet planet thats what nasa is trying to figure out ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bc8ed7568394,E97670F90297,can we go to a diffrenet planet like in mars venus jupitor all these planets so in this story it talks about how can we go figure out what can be suitable for a human so in this story it talks about how venus can be a good place they got some data in. They talk about some features that earth has like venus has valleys in mountains in craters in paragraph 4 it talks about some of the same features it has with earth. They are looking for more ways they can reserch they are thinking about sending some rovers to look around take pictures of the place in how they can actually go around in check out the planet but the way they been doing is taking pictures from a ship in actually actually looking from close thats what they been doing they still dont want to send people there cuase they dont want to take cuations of someone dying in the planet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bfc75792aa01,E97670F90297,so can we actually go in look around in a diffrenet planet in then call it our home well we dont know yet we first need all the information we need to actually start go to a different place but the future well tell the story. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dccad432ca75,E978E759F26B,I'm going to type an essay about an arugement for this technology to read students emotional expressions. The newest software update is called Facial Action Coding System. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0891c336afa0,E978E759F26B,I really feel like this type of technogoly would be really helpful. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6d8f4c1aeb12,E978E759F26B,There is a lot of prons and cons to this technogoly ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30bed9669dc4,E978E759F26B,"because some students may not want you to know how they are feeling or what there emtions are, I feel as if some students need the help or may feel, let's say lonely but don't like saying they are so they fake a smile but those are the students who really need someone to know. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a7cbb4a0eef,E978E759F26B,The software update has promising applications for a variety of industries. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41fe713b2f2e,E978E759F26B,"The computer constrcuts a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles. I feel that it will help a lot more with young teenagers in our generation.
+
+A lot of people in our generation are going through depression and they don't like to telling people about it, so if you have this software it would help kids from sucide thoughts or some things like that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e218ef73de1f,E978E759F26B,Another reason why it woud be helpful is because you could use it on anyone not just students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c5f9683dc69,E978E759F26B,"My first reason why I think it would be a brillant idea would be an example such as this, if you went to class one day and seen your friend upset you would be able to look at her and know shes upset but if you asked her and she said no I'm fine, she would be lying. If you had this software update and you used it on your friend it would say she is 70 percent upset and 30 percent mad. So now you know she is upset most of the time and you could change that by talking about things with her letting her parents know. Little things like that could change someones life forever. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c2c579f8480,E978E759F26B,My last reason I think it would be helpful is because you would know how everyones feeling. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fee8573650d7,E978E759F26B,"The Mona Lisa is to demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while showoing how much a computer can do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a78426b8b3f9,E978E759F26B,"It also says in paragraph 6 that ""
+
+A classroom computer could recogonize when a student is becoming bored or confused"". That could also help the teacher out a lot. Some students don't always let the teacher know if they are bored or confused because maybe they are scared or embarssed, but now your teacher would know if you were confused about something. She would be able to help you or do something a little more exciting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97ebc886a351,E978E759F26B,As I said in the introduction I think this would be a really good idea for this software update to be in classrooms for teacher and students. I think it would help with teenagers. I gave a couple reasons why I would want this software update or why it would help. I have seen a lot of students falling asleep in class and the teacher just keeps going. I have also been one of those students were I'm really confused but I don't want to say in front of the class so I either don't say anything or I say something to my buddy next to me. Those are my reasons why I am for this Facial Action Coding System. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b14ac35fc3fb,E98407C4200B,Why should you join the Seagoing Cowboys? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+25c29d9ab251,E98407C4200B,"You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you can have many adventures while you are doing the job. If you want to get out into the world this will be a great job for you! 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+e11e7f749aee,E98407C4200B,you can have many adventures. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90e7f1283b56,E98407C4200B,"When I was a Seagoing Cowboy, I took many trips. I went to New Orleans, Greece, China, and many more places. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db9712e1c671,E98407C4200B,you can meet new animals and care for them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7a59554557c,E98407C4200B,You can also take care of other people too ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7703143f8010,E98407C4200B,"What prepared me for working with the animals? The thing that prepared me was when I worked at Aunt Katie's farm when I was little. But somtimes it can be dangeruos. One night I was caring for the animals, and I slipped off of a latter. When I fell off the latter, I cracked a couple off my ribs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8597dbbabcde,E98407C4200B,you can meet new people from all around the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9257937c6e09,E98407C4200B,"When I went on to be a Seagoing Cowboy, I had my friend Don Reist. He is the one that asked me if I wanted to going with him. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2c2b608d1d2d,E98407C4200B,"Why should you be a Seagoing Cowboy? I think you should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you can have many adventures, you can meet new animals, and you can also meet new people. Thats why I thing you should should be a Seagoing Cowboy. You will never get tired of be a Seagoing Cowboy.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+748cc522b380,E9A2061A9A1D,"Studying Venus has the good and the bad. You find out so much about your planet and others. Like whybdonthey call Venus an ""Evening Star"" when its actually a planet. With Venus being provern a very challenging place to examine, ist hard to find out more abiut it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+781423c5b73c,E9A2061A9A1D,"Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite that dangers. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+cece77b16aac,E9A2061A9A1D,One of the big dangers studying Venus is the temperature ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+819852aa1a7a,E9A2061A9A1D,"Venus is the hottes planet in our solar system. The planets temperature averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than then on our planet. The conditions are way more extreme then what we've encounter on Earth. In addition to the heat there's erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fee085c3d505,E9A2061A9A1D,We could be living on Venus. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bb2a333e3820,E9A2061A9A1D,"Venus has the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus used to be covered with oceans that could've supported various forms of life. Even today Venus has rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is an opttion for a planetary visit. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05471efafc60,E9A2061A9A1D,There are solutions for the temperature. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f06667b4f8fc,E9A2061A9A1D,"NASA's solution is to let scientist float above the fray. A vehicle hovering 30 miles above the Venusian landscape. It would be like airplanes flying over storms, but in this case its a blimp-like vehicle flying over the 800 degree surface. The vehicle would be thirty-plus miles above the surface. Solar power would be plentful anc radiation would not exceed Earth levels, survivable but not easy conditions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8472e1319189,E9A2061A9A1D,"Trying to meet the challenge by Venus has value. Human curiosity will most likely lead us to many intimidating endeavors. With the dangers studing Venus, helps us incase we need to move to another planet. Studying Venus is dangerous but, it has its perks.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+55bdd1d6f648,E9E9AEC9100C,Student should designed the summer project ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d3f750524b09,E9E9AEC9100C,it gives them more freedom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+471786f9e779,E9E9AEC9100C,more experience ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d851f2753b8,E9E9AEC9100C,it is life-changing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1f3e4d95d1f,E9E9AEC9100C,"However, not everyone would agree with this position. Some people may argue that teacher should designed the summer project. For example it challenging and you will learn more. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+481c33c29586,E9E9AEC9100C,it gives you more freedom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d659a65d1466,E9E9AEC9100C,"in India there was a kid named Generic_Name, sometime when the teacher was not in the class room. He always help his class mates, one day his teacher give them a project and he decide to do a toy little rocket, also he decide to test the rocket and it worked. And now he win the grand winner award by the President of India. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5ff835b2249,E9E9AEC9100C,it gives you more experience ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70fa339df76d,E9E9AEC9100C,"in schools teacher are the one who do all the work, and if a student did not do his work, it will be a waste of time for the student and the teacher. If we allow student to make their own work they will know how hard is also they gain experience by doing the project by them self. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a8f65693a00e,E9E9AEC9100C,it is life-changing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+151fee574af9,E9E9AEC9100C,"in Generic_City schools they have to take every class every year and some extra load on the top. But expert for one thing it was summer school project, because they want their student to relay on their self not on the others. Sometime when you do the work on your own, you known how hard is the work and you will more learn by the work you did in the end. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+721c6c9b4036,E9E9AEC9100C,"If we allow the student to do their work on their self. They will know how hard is it and they will force their self to the limit to do better at ever thing they do, also it gain more experience to do it right and freedom to think of an idea they have and life-changing is the one put it to together in the end to make it better. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d4aaac66342e,EA238A2AE63A,"Why Mona never smile in her painting. The artis make Mona smile into art. The artis try to make her happy into art. Mona she’s 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.
+
+The author write about becaues he wants the peolpe to know that there only 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry ina person. The story is best on is trying to make you smile. That why the author write this story. The story is about a smile just a girl smile i always see everybody smile everybody. Making mona smile she probalby don't won't to smile.
+
+While looking the in the mirror there a smile in there. Mona smile when happy or angry. Smile is a good thing in your life. two ways to make someone happy in there life be funny, be really funny be like a bunny to make them smile. We peolpe has the same impressive everty day. Imagine a computer that knows when you’re happy or sad. If there a computer know when you're happy or sad that's kinda cool.
+
+A new technology called the facial action coding system enables computers to identify human emotions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+04c59f1752ad,EA238A2AE63A,That is kinda funny how can a computers know when your sad or happy. Computers don't have emotions only living things do have emotions.  ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3cb56436a1f2,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"First off, the technology to read emotions of students in a classroom is valuable ",Position,Adequate,,,
+af184f1e3e01,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"For good side of things, this technology created by Professor Thomas Huang can make a whole class smart and can speed up the progress while things go. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+263bf75a8ee2,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"Second, what the technology helps with the students is when the students are confused or bored ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d14b5f2f83a8,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"then that comupter is going to be able to recognize that face and really help the student out like a teacher would be able to do. This can save time and will have more students understand subject even more. The technology would be able to calculate almost any emotions 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+49c5f4a9e7b0,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"
+Lastly, these technology that Professor Thomas Huang owns is very helpful for the societyand for schools ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+72b499a5c636,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"SInce now that Professor Thomas Huang's technology can calculate the tiniest emotions, it can support us dramatically. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bd88e55d1d05,EA2BAEFCE4F2,"This will be very valuable to classrooms, students, and teachers around the world. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bdfaa7af3203,EA3B8E4F74DB,"Venus is the closest planet to Earth and one of the brightest points in a dark sky.
+
+Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus has proved it is very challenging to get data from the planet. The biggest question with Venus is it worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d5d48ab0d906,EA3B8E4F74DB,Astronomers should try to get more data because it imbodys Earth more than any other planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f0c3cde604e,EA3B8E4F74DB,"Venus has features that are very simurlar to those on Earth. In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author says ""The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.""
+
+It shows that Venus is very a like to Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb645868e6f5,EA3B8E4F74DB,"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has had new and safe ideas so that we can still reserch Venus even with the dangers. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d04e04c460ec,EA3B8E4F74DB,"They want to floaut above the fray.
+
+Wouldn't be easy conditions, but not hard enough to kill humans. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+73d6593db8bc,EA3B8E4F74DB,Now you know how dangers and worthy the explorion on Venus would be. But you sholudn't let a little fear get in the way of the fun and Knowlege on getting. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d92a8c2d1521,EA3B8E4F74DB,"Wanting to do the challege on Venus has value, has dangers, and doubts ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cc676e3ff729,EA441360E42C,Can you believe that schools are now making students stay after-school to participate in an extracurricular activity. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f8a8cbe1d670,EA441360E42C,I disagree with schools having students participate in one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5167175567a8,EA441360E42C,"becasuse students need time for other activities outside of school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2db0975bc5cd,EA441360E42C,students need time with their families ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfdb6afbc151,EA441360E42C,and they need time to do their homework. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3df8d74eeb9d,EA441360E42C,"Many students love coming home right when the school bell rings and having the rest of the day to do what they like. This is not the case at some schools. At my school our principal is having us participate in one extracurricular activity. I disagree with this because students need time to play and practice sports such as basketball, baseball, hockey, and soccer. Students also need time to hang out with their friends not just inside of school, but outside too. If a student is forced to stay after-school and there is nothing they like there than it may bother the students emotions and make them sad. If a student is sad or upset about this it may affect their participation, attendence, and effort. I do not want kids spending more time than they have to at school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ee8ff2f0a48,EA441360E42C,"There are a ton of students who do not get to see their family at all due to school. Students need time to be with their family and socialize with them like playing a board game or having a nice conversation. Extracurricular activities may interfere with the time that kids have to spend with their families. It is very important that kids spend time with their families because it keeps their mental health well, keeps them in line, and provides comfort for them. It keeps their mental health stable because they do not worry about seeing their parents or when they will see their parents again. It keeps them in line because they have somebody to tell them what is ok and what is not ok and they have somebody to discipline them. It provides comfort for kids because they know somebody or some group of people are there for them. If students had no time to spend with their family it would most likely casue many problems for them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ef7d5be014f6,EA441360E42C,"Did you know that teachers assign kids with loads of homework? If you didn't then now you do. Here at my school I get home and it takes me a couple of hours to get my homework done. I was very disappointed when I was told that every student has to take part in one extracurricular activity. If this time is taken away from students it will take away time for them to do their homework. If kids start not having time to do their homework their grades may drop, which could make them depressed, and it could affect their behavior at school. If a students grade drops their parents may get mad which would make them sad and upset which could lead to them doing something hurtful or bad to themselves. It could also affect their behavior at school by making them not pay attention and start getting into mischief. If students have to stay after-school for an extra activity, it takes away time for homework which kids need to do and if they dont have the time bad things may happen. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4d186f0aaacc,EA441360E42C,"I believe that students should not be forced to participate in one extracurricular activity at school because they need time for other activities outside of school, time to spend with their families, and time to do their homework. If time that students have for these activities gets taken away by school it may lead to something bad ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1959c4656e05,EA58637960FB,"Luke Bomberger used to be an average teenager working two part-time jobs. Then his friend, Don Reist, came and asked him if he wanted to be a 'Seagoing Cowboy', or one who helps bring livestock to war victims in Europe. Luke then took this as an opportunity of a lifetime and couldn't resist.
+
+The Seagoing Cowboys are a group of people who take care of livestock that were being shipped overseas to help the many that were devastated by the war in Europe. This livestock included young cows, horses, and mules. Shortly after Don and Luke found out about the Seagoing Cowboys, they then both signed up. LIttle did Luke and Don know, this job had a lot of risks.
+
+The Seagoing Cowboys were a great part of an even greater orginization, the UNRRA, or the United Nations Relief and Rehibilitation Adminisrtation. This orginization was made up of 44 nations. This orginization also helped relieve and rehibilltate the devastated families of Europe. Luke knew what he was doing was a great cause, but did he know that going across the Atlantic and the Pacific oceans was a very risky thing. Luke could have had second thoughts about the risks that he was taking, but he wasn't doing it for himself, he was doing it for the people that needed his help.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+629bc471828f,EA9FCAE3C575,"A planet that is toasty at 170 degrees Fahrenheit, air pressure clos to sea level on Earth, Venus is the most interesting planet in the solar system ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e6f54819b8b6,EA9FCAE3C575,thatthe author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e81337446088,EA9FCAE3C575,It may well once have been the most earth-like planet that scientists discuss further visits to its surface but the problem is that no spacecraft survived th landingfor more than a few hours. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+149efa5a4330,EA9FCAE3C575,"No matter if the surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, 90 times greater than what people on earth can experience, but scientists are so fascinated by Venus and earth, how alike they were long ago ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb874b8fc4ce,EA9FCAE3C575,"On paragraph 4, ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life"" and
+
+""The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valley's, moutains, and craters."" Venus could had living forms living in their surface if Venus has any type of familiar features just like Earth. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c535691c0df,EA9FCAE3C575,"Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11936b245d71,EA9FCAE3C575,"Humans curiosity is amazing, in the text it explains how it will likely lead us into many equally, but it could also lead us to something unique that not even Earth has that no other human could think about. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df6ea0766b25,EA9FCAE3C575,"No matter if Venus dangers could be extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, it is the most talk about planet to study it's worthy pursuit, With sights that once was familiar like Earth and various forms of life that has the humans curiousity on Venus.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4c0867d695b6,EAE3A1E3B396,"Activities for Everyone!
+
+Now everybody will have something to do!
+
+The principal just decided that every student must take part in an activity, before school, after school or even during school! ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6d894fdd7412,EAE3A1E3B396,"This new, amazing and creative idea will be beneficial to everyone! Not only the students, but the entire school administration including the teachers! Even parents will profit from the outstanding new idea! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f25f4336d0c7,EAE3A1E3B396,"After this decision starts getting enforced, every student will be able to find something they like! 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b8440d5888fc,EAE3A1E3B396,Possibilities range from participating in sports to serving on the student council or helping to create the school yearbook! Students are very likely to find new friends while they participate in these activities and probably even run into some old ones! Having friends in their activity will surely motivate them to do better and achieve their goal! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19186264f5d4,EAE3A1E3B396,"Meeting those new people and having that special diversity will bring lots of students together and form unimaginable new bonds, friendships and relationships. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7314a37bf815,EAE3A1E3B396,"Students struggling with their social life and stressing school days will finally have something to look forward to! The sport activities will also greatly improve ones understanding and overall skill in said sport. Joining sports teams will set a positive example for students and be a healthy and rewarding getaway from anything that might be bothering them. Working on the yearbook is an overall exciting experience that involves montages,photo shop and other activities! Students will be able to have fun and help the school at the same time! Student Council is also a splendid decision and it will show a student how many real life companies work, Students will be given more responsibility and trust. Both student council and yearbook editor have much in common and both contribute to help shape a young adults future life by polishing their skills, interests and hobbies. After school parents might still be working or just have too much on their hands to care for their children, This is where these extracurricular activities will also come in handy because students will be supervised, be constructive and have fun at the same time! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3b94d2c59a7,EAE3A1E3B396,Overall these activities would be a great getaway for every student! Activities will include creative and challenging brain usage to athleticism. Students will be taken care of and supervised while they help out themselves and the school. Sports will be healthy and inspiring for the young kids and put a positive example for what they can do in the future. These activities will remodel the students interests and hand over many new possibilities! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87dc72eaf189,EAE4C1EE9FB9,I found some information about why we can't text and drive. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2a0d046153a1,EAE4C1EE9FB9,We can't text and drive ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f339ffe5dcc,EAE4C1EE9FB9,because it causes people to die and get into car accidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab4e94e1bd17,EAE4C1EE9FB9,"In one paragraph it said 90 percent of people died in car accidents from driving and texting.
+
+My friends was in a accident because he was texting and driving. Its no joke he almost lost he life and his girlfriends too. Texting and driving is awful.
+
+So if you love your life and who you where with you won't text and drive. In over 30 states its illegal to text and drive. If you are texting and driving and a cop see you, your going to jail for at least 5-10 years.
+
+Texting while driving is the worst thing you can do. Over 1.6 million crashes on a yearly basis.(texting and driving) In 2018 4,637 people died in a car crashes due to cell phone use. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10f1777cf917,EAE4C1EE9FB9,Did you know that texting and driving is more dangerous then drunk driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64abb0fb5804,EAE4C1EE9FB9,"According to NHTSA it is by 3x. you also could get fined for at least $20 to thousands of dollars depending on what state you are in.
+
+More then 10% of teens get into car crashes. You can hit people in the street. You can hit another car and you can kill people while doing it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f63bf024294e,EAE4C1EE9FB9,All country's have laws on texting and driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3ec20a86123,EAE4C1EE9FB9,"Alabama its you have to pay $25 dollars on ticket. Arizona you have to pay $75-$149. In GA you have to pay $50 on ticket.
+
+On paragraph 6 on From https://behavioralscientist. org it say. When you are engaged in conversation, be it on a call or texting-or even with someone else in the car-your attention is divided. And as fallible humans, we only have so much attention to spare. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+595745bbea7c,EAE4C1EE9FB9,"In fact, while there are very few magic numbers in life, there is a magic number associated with how many things we can attend to at once. And it's not a lot. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a21ae5c8b337,EAED55A47DC5,The fact that this tecnoligy is avalible to human kind is amizing it can be used in many ways ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+651391fe85b8,EAED55A47DC5,"The passage says that ""to an expert faces dont lie these muscle clues are sometime used to spot when a smiling polotition or celebirty isn't being truthfull ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee389ed3ed8e,EAED55A47DC5,its amazing isn't it all we have to do is take a picture and voala we know what the choice is because if he is being truethfull we can say yes he fits but if he is lying we know that we have to make a better choice that just vote on him right of way . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+81a8f133e920,EAED55A47DC5,Can you emagine being able to use this like for more than just polotitions like maybe the presedent or a school teacher a dilinquent or maybe even a spouse. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1eef66aac166,EAED55A47DC5,this would bring alot of contriversy yes ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+015c9218f1d5,EAED55A47DC5,but it is stil amazing because they wont have to do much just snap a picture and thee program will caulculate it think about how many crimes this will solve . ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d3121a9315d1,EAED55A47DC5,In conclusion this invention is revolutionary program will have a huge inpact in every social aspect. The world wont be the same every thing will be diffrent because we will now what the presedent is really thinking and when he is lying or when he is scared and then we can better protect our selves . ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+75c9bb5d528d,EAF6BCA737BD,"In the article ""The Challenge od Exploring Venus,"" the author states that NASA has a compelling idea to send humans to Venus to study it."" ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+c7829f5ddddf,EAF6BCA737BD,Their solution to surving the harsh environment would be to float above the fray. Avoiding the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of thier way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39d283e9bc49,EAF6BCA737BD,"In paragraph 6 it states that,"" Researchers cannot take sample of rock,gas or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to uderstand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite therisks."" Meeaning that if they want to be able to study Venus from the ground they would have to build something to allow them to safetly gather samples and information first hand. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48933ae1194e,EAF6BCA737BD,In paragraph 7 the author mentions that looking back to world war ll they could use mechanical computers instead of using eletcronic ones. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5c9fcaa868a,EAF6BCA737BD,"The mechanical computers could be made to widthstand the damage of acid,heat and pressure. To test the mechanical computers they can put it through the series of test that they can create in the test chambers to see if they can widthstand it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d83d69c2364,EAF6BCA737BD,In conclusion if we wanted to get a closer look at Venus then we would have to send scientist to venus in specially made space crafts to be able to widthstand the dangers of the sulfuric acid in it's atmosphere. n ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7020d427f2aa,EB10F93974CA,This article of ''Making Mona Lisa Smile'' it talks about how a computer seastem can raed student emotional expressions such a Mona lisa emotion. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d5f32c8bee75,EB10F93974CA,"This sieastem can recognize emotions whether you're angry, happy, surprise, disgust, fearles and ect. This process begins when the computer constrac a 3-D computer model of the face. all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Action unit are movement of one ore more muscle. Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman wich are the creators of FACS.
+
+Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions; happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle, above your eyes, reased your eyebrows whe you surprise also your orbicularis around your mouth, and tightens your lips to sho anger. This example we can se it in the firts pharaghaph when it talks when shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and r percent angry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac6a4140edf7,EB10F93974CA,And yeah i dont have nothing to arguing because i think the cumputer is a good a idea for student because it can tell whether the emotions are ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7a1237116353,EB10F93974CA,Thats what i think about this article of ''Making the Mona Lisa smile''.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+08d94bb21f5f,EB3398FD0FF5,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author states that exploring Venus would be an immense challenge to overcome due to all of the extremely harsh conditions. Venus, also known as the ""Evening Star,"" is an extremely dangerous planet to explore ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4711b93a580e,EB3398FD0FF5,"Even though scientists are aware of these difficult factors, people like the author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" still think that being informed about this bright point of light is worth it. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+1dfa53b923f4,EB3398FD0FF5,"According to astronomers, Venus may have at one point been the planet with the most Earth-like features. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+40b855fb8785,EB3398FD0FF5,"Venus is said to now have a ""surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."" These characteristics are one of the reasons as to why the author states that Venus is a pursuit worth risking many things for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b7ea80b2d1f,EB3398FD0FF5,"Another reason is because in paragraph 4, the author states ""Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11cfad37eca7,EB3398FD0FF5,"Although these are all fair reasons to want to visit Venus once again, astronomers have to keep in mind all of the negative characteristics that will set their exploration behind. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c0368e40bb3b,EB3398FD0FF5,All astronomers and explorers are well aware of all of the challenging conditions such as the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere and the atmospheric pressure being 90 times greater in Venus than the pressure in Earth. These are not the only challenging conditions, another dangerous feature is that temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit in Venus's surface. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+1f0257e0fde1,EB3398FD0FF5,"Consequently, the author states in paragraph six that there are now many scienstist searching for technology that will be able to stand the harsh conditions in Venus ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+359e0afb0d2b,EB3398FD0FF5,"""Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+340730bd25ba,EB3398FD0FF5,"In the previous paragraph, the author informs the readers about an idea that NASA has thought of. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+119b6be63ee7,EB3398FD0FF5,"The plan for sending people to study Venus would not give the necessary information to be properly informed of this volatile planet. All of these obstacles are not enough to calm human's desire of knowledge about unearthly topics. In paragraph eight, the author says that all of the challenges are not enough to mellow down our curiosity enough to quit studying Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea16b9f4c4c0,EB3398FD0FF5,"In conclusion, the claim about Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents that the author of ""The Challenges of Exploring Venus"" states is well supported by facts and perfectly thought out ideas. Although Venus is an extremely dangerous planet packed with many reasons as to why exploration is currently held back, NASA is still looking for ways to be able to gain more valuable insight about the Evening Star. Just like the author said, learning and travelling should not be limited by doubts, and scientists will not let doubts and fears stop them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+985233221c04,EB763115B6CD,"Do you use your phone while driving? If you said yes, then you need to stop. If you don't then you may end up dead and if you don't believe me then let me tell you some facts. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0e4089ff31cd,EB763115B6CD,I don't think people should be able to use their phones while operating a vehicle. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+85ea5b9bebc2,EB763115B6CD,"Firstly, driving requires your full attention, but phones compromise this focus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+91cc34a4ed8f,EB763115B6CD,"You need to keep both hands on the steering wheel to be the most effective driver. But, every time you text, read messages or talk on a cell phone without a hands-free device, not only is your focus compromised, but you can't keep both hands on the wheel. Phone use when you are driving can also affect your alertness of the surroundings, which can make you prone to collisions. Also, distraction and inattention are the number one cause of traffic accidents and it is estimated that nearly every collision involves one of these two related errors. Driving takes all your attention and it is your responsibility to keep your eyes on the road, so put down the phones and pay attention to the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d957ac9ea61e,EB763115B6CD,"Secondly, people who use a cell phone in the car can drive erratically, which puts others at risk ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4f99dec4bb13,EB763115B6CD,"They may fail to give the proper signals, miss road signs, change lanes abruptly or respond slowly to hazards. Erratic driving patterns can be extremely dangerous to everyone else on the road, including other drivers, pedestrians, and animals. Also, motorist involved in a stressful or emotional phone conversation may exhibit aggressive behavior while they drive, such as road rage. This may cause the erratic driving to worsen and this greatly increases the chance of causing an accident. So, if checking your phone is going to cause you to get mad and drive like you've got no sense and possibly kill someone, then there's no need in even picking it up. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6fc94e9ec1d6,EB763115B6CD,"
+Lastly, there are now legal ramifications when it comes to using phones while driving. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c58368b50f52,EB763115B6CD,"You can have criminal penalties placed on you such as fines and tickets and depending on if you had an accident and killed someone you may face more serious criminal consequences such as jail time. Driving with a device can cause you to have higher insurance premiums because insurance rates are tied to a driver's driving history and if you get pulled over for using your phone while driving too many times, it could cause your insurance premiums to spike. Also, you can lose your driving privileges because just like your insurance, you accumulate points for your recklessness. So, if you accumulate too many, you can no longer drive. So, unless your like tickets, fines, jail time, or losing your driver's license, I suggest you wait till you get home to check you phone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48298b48ac80,EB763115B6CD,"
+Well there you have it, everything wrong with using your phone while operating a vehicle. Hopefully, you all learned something from this. Hopefully, what you learned was that you shouldn't use your phone while driving. But, if you haven't, that's fine. Just ask yourself a question for me. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f8eb17944ab6,EB793B72A8C4,"Extracurricular activities are important for students, and I agree that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+74669bfa437d,EB793B72A8C4,Students should try something new instead of doing nothing ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7055650e1b39,EB793B72A8C4,"Students can gain a lot from this experience, so I believe that they should participate in them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ab969375513,EB793B72A8C4,"I think that even if students don't want to participate in these activities, they should because they can learn things that they never knew before, and I think that it could make an impact on their lives. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1e2afdc0fef,EB793B72A8C4,Extracurricular activities are good for students to participate in because they can give you something to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5898bb63b092,EB793B72A8C4,they can help you meet and befriend new people ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ded0f3b4f7d9,EB793B72A8C4,and they can help kids find potential ideas and hobbies. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f81d83b71a4b,EB793B72A8C4,Extracurricular activities can give you something to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88f91e2dc963,EB793B72A8C4,"Some of my friends go home and do nothing after school. It can get boring to have nothing to do for the remainder of the day. Participating in an after-school activity can pass time and help you to not be bored, especially if you are participating in an activity you enjoy. When I was in elementary school, I went to an after-school art club so I could pass the time doing something that I liked. I also did after-school soccer in the fourth grade, and I started playing volleyball in the fourth grade. I am still playing volleyball to this day. These kinds of activities can give you something to do instead of going on your phone and doing nothing. I have gotten more productive over the past couple of years because I participate in extracurricular activities. I believe that kids can be more productive, and extracurricular activities are a vital way to achieve this goal. Not only is it a good way to spend your time, but it is also a good way to meet people. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8d6c46a619a4,EB793B72A8C4,Extracurricular activities are a good way to socialize with people because you are participating in activities and games that you enjoy with other people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+043c305a27c2,EB793B72A8C4,"You share the same interests, and liking the same things as someone else is a good way to bond and socialize with people. I met a lot of people through after-school volleyball, and I am still friends with most of them to this day. Our team would go out to restaurants after our games whether we won or lost because we were friends, and we liked to play together. We all liked playing the sport, so it was easy to make friends with each other. I also met a lot of people through my art club because we liked to draw, and we liked to talk to each other. If you have trouble making friends, you will most likely be able to socialize and bond with others through these events. I met one of my best friends through after-school dance classes when I was in elementary school. We enjoy dancing and listening to music together. Not only are extracurricular activities able to help you get to know people, but they can also help you find your interests. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9dbf3e46cc76,EB793B72A8C4,"Having schools require students to take at least one extracurricular activity can help them find hobbies, and they can help students find things that they didn't know they were interested in ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+92fa67c53731,EB793B72A8C4,"For example, I once convinced my sister to play volleyball. She didn't really want to do it. After school that day, she came to our volleyball practice. She ended up loving the sport, and she also plays it to this day. There are many different activities, such as theater, art, sports, science and math clubs, and the student council. Students are most likely going to find an activity they like and stick with it as they get older. Doing an activity that you enjoy can be very entertaining, and you might keep doing it in the future. I am in my school's eighth grade chorus, and I want to continue this activity as I get into high school. If you really enjoy these activities at school, you might also try to practice them at home. If you like to go to an art club at your school, you might continue to draw at home. These activities can also lead to trying to improve in your hobby as well. I continue to draw at home so I can improve. Schools give access to these potential new hobbies and activities, and I think that students should go to them and give them a chance. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69bd0e35047c,EB793B72A8C4,"In conclusion, I believe that students should be required to take at least one extracurricular activity. It is something that I believe is crucial to who students grow up to be. If students join an after-school activity, they can become more responsible. Having them sit around all day can make that person lazy in the future. They not might want to try new things in the future because they were raised that way. Giving kids these potential interests can help impact their choices in life, such as what they want to do for a job or what they want to do for a hobby. People might already have their future planned, but joining an extracurricular activity can change their views and can give them new ideas. Overall, I think that extracurricular activities are a good way for students and kids to spend their time participating in and enjoying.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3e9820c3666f,EB7944FDAF63,"Technology has been used for decades in education, from the basic computer to smart boards technology has been commonly used to improve the learning capabilities of students in modern times. The 'Facial Action Coding System'
+
+technology has the ability to help professors and teachers around the world get more into the minds of their students and engage the students into a classroom where learning is not a unified thing, but more customized and free depending on student ability. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9f033fc51cce,EB7944FDAF63,"Firstly, with technology becomming more popular, an increasing number students are having the ability to learn through technology ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5814277ae107,EB7944FDAF63,"Along with that teachers and professors around the world have had to adapt to the higher usage of technology and programs to teach their students. This program gives teachers and technology the ability to adapt to their students, and encourage even confused or fearful students to learn by engaging a learning environment where a student's computer or device could read and recognize the confusion or joy a student is undergoing while learning,and therefor helping the teacher know the students level of understanding. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4bc2e270e8bb,EB7944FDAF63,"Secondly, having a program installed into the lense of cameras in students devices would open up new insight to teachers ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8cf3b3031081,EB7944FDAF63,"For example, if a student watches a video lesson in a History class and is confused by something then their teacher could find the question, or peice of video, and simply adjust the lesson to fit the demographic and understanding of that child. There are many benifits to this technology including in the home, if a parent were to have the ability to see where their child was confused or frusterated the parent could also take some time to cover the missing material. This also prevents students who are fustrated but are to fearful or anxious to ask for help to not recive the assistance they need. This technology could open up door ways for students instead of them being lost in the information, but this technology is still new. . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40969969a915,EB7944FDAF63,"Finnaly, one of the main reasons students do poorly in the current education system is that the student feels like they are not reciveing enough help or that they are lost. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ec4f8470390,EB7944FDAF63,"With average class sizing being anywhere from 22-32 students, a single or even two teachesr cannot assist all of the students individualy, and this creates a problem. Using the 'Facial Action Coding System' teachers can register which students need help and those who dont and pay more attention to the students who need help. This would therefore increase the amount of students able to retain information and help the school. Being lost in a lesson wouldn't be so common of a problem. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a635208bfb88,EB7944FDAF63,"In conclusion, the 'Facial Action Coding System' opens new advancments in the the education systems by encourgaing an environment where teachers could have the technology to know when a student was confused or not understanding information, and also giving the ability for teachers to construct a lesson to fit the children who don't directly understand. It also proves a good method for parents to get involved in their child's learning and help the student with direct problems at the root instead of complications with the entire subject ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9899f275d7b1,EB7944FDAF63,"So yes, this technology is very vaulable to the education of millions of students around the world who don't fully grasp their teachers learning methods or are just confused. ",Position,Effective,,,
+98de7cdd2380,EB8B27A81300,"The author of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" thinks that exploring Venus is worth the risks that are required. ",Position,Effective,,,
+380f9aae222e,EB8B27A81300,"Venus is a planet that most people think are a star because of how brightly it shines at night which makes it very noticeable. Not many other things are known about Venus: Not many people think about exploring Venus when they think of space exploration. In the article the author talks about both the problems with exploring Venus, but he also talks about how exploring Venus is something that is a possibility for the future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3aa8a25390e,EB8B27A81300,"The author states that Venus is ""often referred to as Earth's 'twin'"" because out of all the planets Venus has a similar density and size compared to Earth. The terrain of Venus is also very similar to the terrain of Earth. They both have landmarks that are similar ""to familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c44f627d74b,EB8B27A81300,This evidence shows how the landscape of Venus has the possibility to be a home for humans. The similarities between Earth and Venus make Venus a valuable place to explore in greater depth. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0e963758a7bb,EB8B27A81300,"Although Venus has a similar terrain to Earth, the ground climate is too rough for anyone to safely land in Venus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a274cfe0d976,EB8B27A81300,"Venus has a temperature that humans can not survive in, 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Also on Venus the pressure is 90 times what humans experience on Earth. Humans have never experienced conditions as extreme as those on Venus: ""Even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of [the] oceans"" would be crushed and the high temperatures ""would liquefy many metals."" Something that was made to be able to go withstand high pressures, like a submarine, would be crushed on Venus, and metals can withstand very high temperatures but on venus they would liqeufy. It is unsafe and humanly impossible for humans to try to explore the land of Venus when some of the best technology can not even withstand the climate of Venus. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fff4acc6dd8b,EB8B27A81300,"As of now there is not enough technology for humans to explore Venus on the surface, but they can explore Venus from above. It is a possibility for scientists to hover 30 miles above Venus ",Claim,Effective,,,
+478257f55bea,EB8B27A81300,"This way the scientists will not have to experience the total wrath of Venus's surface, but they would experince ""temperatures that would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, [and] the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth."" Humans can live in those conditions, even though they may not be ideal. Scientists would be able to explore Venus without putting them at risk. There is still not technology for the scientists to throughly explore Venus the way they want to. They would only get a glimpse into what Venus is like. New inivations are being worked on that can withstand Venus's tumultous surface, so that scientists can get the full picture of
+
+Venus. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c6fbd05d3455,EB8B27A81300,"Venus has great potential for exploration, but with that great potential comes great risk. The author of the article talks about the problems with exploring Venus, but he also talks about how exploring Venus is something that is a possibilty for the future. Venus is very similar to Earth in the terrain that they both have, but the surface conditions of Venus are deadly to humans. There is the possibilty of hovering above Venus to be closer to the surface without having to experince the extreme conditions. With the advancements in technology and new innovations scientists are hoping that there is a way for them to get closer to the surface without endangering their lives. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a20ed016c33e,EBA557BABACB,in my opinon i do not think their should be a machine that could read my emotions ever i belive privacy is important and the will for someone to express their emotions to someone whom they may care about is sometimes sacred or personal varying on the person. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+85f512d68cd4,EBA557BABACB,technology that tracks the way our muscles move could be used for other puposes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec76f4b7cd41,EBA557BABACB,the machine can even track if were angry and how our lips tighten around our mouth ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21127f24fe07,EBA557BABACB,"this other ways we could use such as facial recongtion, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+883ad939b557,EBA557BABACB,"best said himself "" even though indiviuals showing varying degrees of expression"" these could identify someones facial muscles even if they had face suregy or we could use this as machinery as facial reconstructions benifts ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13fed68e32e3,EBA557BABACB,if its able to identify muscles of every unique person even famous art work like the mona lisa then this could have other benifts ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e46965effcd6,EBA557BABACB,we could even look into the past to tell how historical figures were feeling in paintings or older photos. or we also could use to know animals emotions and how we can make an animal have a better day or stop animal related accidents from happening such as animal attacks. One good reason is if women could know if how we really felt about that dress the one they asked our opinons about then the trouble comes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ff987772b3e,EBA557BABACB,"often times emotions are the reflection of the human spirit emotions are things that leads rebilons agaimts broken systems or start movements,emotions are what gives us the extra inch for the push, emotions soemtimes give a door to grieve, our even hold our opinons , see we have feelings inside that no one should look threw in todays society alot of mans virutues once held have gone, emotions are something that is deep imside us that we can hold onto , humanity always wants to know even it breaks or passes the limit but , if emotions were able to show they could stop so much possibilties , imagine if slave masters knew their slaves emotions, or britian during the american revoultion knew, emotitons is how cover ourselves . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac83241817bd,EBBA6790B73B,Agree or disagree? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+89b504d8567e,EBBA6790B73B,I think joining in a extracurricular activity is very beneficial ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fda786a9e10f,EBBA6790B73B,students are able to be a little more active ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b76a9768fc10,EBBA6790B73B,help the community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d43bf2911bd4,EBBA6790B73B,"Extracurricular activities has so many outcomes to participating in these activities. Students may not have the opportunity to do there pleasures that may they do at home or once they get out of school. This can also interfere with a students social and sport life. Although there are down sides to extracurricular activities there is a huge benefit such as, knowing that a student has helped or even cared about what he was doing weather it was planting plants, trees, flowers, playing a sport, or even helping a student with their homework. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad8941a7e3e3,EBBA6790B73B,"Some activities that students are able to participate in are sports, yearbook committee, student council, and helping out with the environment ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db826f57f749,EBBA6790B73B,"While doing these activities you continue to make someones day by helping out just even a little bit. Many people, including myself enjoy watering the plants, a little goes a long way. Students often enjoy getting to know others and this is a great way to do so. How cool is it to know we have done an extracurricular activity and while helping our community? There are many activities that students are able to learn and put their brain to the test in a extracurricular session, for example student council. Student council is one of the many mind and brain focusing activities there are in these activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+551fd75fca51,EBBA6790B73B,Extracurricular activities can be enjoyable and entertaining. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+370bf7c2dee9,EBBA6790B73B,"I used to stay after for yearbook committee, and we all learned some new and interesting things. While I was in that that club I was given the opportunity to learn a little more about how I can work on the computer and cropping/fixing images. This activity was very helpful and fun. I now know how it all works out and how I can get involved. If it had not been for my teacher who told me to get involved I wouldn't be as involved as I am right now. I know enjoy doing extracurricular activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a03720f46ec1,EBBA6790B73B,"Lastly, Helping out is not such a horrible thing.
+
+Participating in activities at a local school doesn't have to be terrible. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+beaa66460723,EBBA6790B73B,There are so many activities out there that everyone can try and enjoy. Students get so many interesting things they ca do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7526e72775af,EBBA6790B73B,"Should students participate, yes they should. Many students want to just go home and not do anything, this helps them come out of their shell a lot more. School is not always boring, have fun at school. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ca0e77125a17,EBD36D034DAC,"Lots of kids love having summer break off from school, but when it comes to summer assignments there's only so much time in the summer for students to fit all their prior plans in with all the over-the-summer school work their teachers assign. And majority of students would also rather not do school work on their break from school and would just want to enjoy the time off but many schools require students to do some sort of school work over the summer to keep their brains active and to help them continue to learn. Some students have take part in saying that they would like to design their own summer projects for many different reason. In contrast, some teachers don't agree with the students for the summer projects to be student-designed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a0dfea634196,EBD36D034DAC,The required summer assignments should be teacher-designed by the students upcoming teacher ,Position,Effective,,,
+9c21e7824450,EBD36D034DAC,"the students can be prepared fully on what they are going to learn for the upcoming school year, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+92ea8ace597a,EBD36D034DAC,"so that the their teachers can make sure they include work from last year so they don't forget about the stuff they previously learned about, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+faf8af3997b7,EBD36D034DAC,because teachers will most likely organize the work to be an appropriate amount since they're use to giving school work with projects and due dates but also understand that there are students that go on vacations and won't have the whole summer to complete an assignment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ddbc0ccf1b71,EBD36D034DAC,Teachers will know exactly how to format these projects and/or school work in correct ways to make their students stay active in learning and thinking to be prepared for the upcoming school year since they obviously will be teaching it for the rest of the school year ,Claim,Effective,,,
+38fb00c3e816,EBD36D034DAC,". Since the projects and/or school work will be teacher-designed, their teachers can make sure it's relating to things they will eventually go more in depth with but be put into summer assignments to give some challenge or hints to students for what they're gonna go into more throughout the school year. The summer assignment from their upcoming teachers can also give the student an understanding of how the teachers teaching style is. And the expectations the teacher has since the work is given directly to the student by the teacher themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f377bf386534,EBD36D034DAC,"Teachers can also make sure to include in their summer project some previously learned information on their summer assignments to not only see if they remember and fully learned that particular concept, but to also see where as a student they stand and if they need more help or attention with that topic ",Claim,Effective,,,
+df6d2e139aa7,EBD36D034DAC,"It can help a teacher get to know a student better by seeing where they stand as a student after the work they did in their previous classes/grade. Also, putting in some challenging work from the previous grade can also tell the students that the particular topic or concept could be something their upcoming teacher thinks is very important to fully understand in order to move forward, or just to understand in general. It can give the student an idea of how their teacher thinks and will be doing things from now on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7004f7609db7,EBD36D034DAC,"Since teachers became teachers by going to graduate school and some having other degrees included for their job, they usually have a good, if not, great understanding of good teaching skills and tactics and work format styles from their own past professors and previous teaching experiences. If they have a lot experience, it could help them gain knowledge over the time being on what worked well for them as a teacher and their students versus what didn't work. The teachers could have also been exposed to many different teaching styles and found one they believe is easiest to understand and/or thinks is easiest or their level of students to understand ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bb19b2adcf24,EBD36D034DAC,Teachers can know ways to make sure projects or assignments could be organized good while also not entirely taking up a whole students summer with school work. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8c519d9ee35e,EBD36D034DAC,"They can organize it so it's spread out or split up into parts at a time so they don't put much pressure on the student who could feel overwhelmed by all the work they have to complete in a short amount of time. Especially if the student waits until the last minute to complete their summer assignment because they thought the assignment was really long and time consuming. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+710aec83a4ab,EBD36D034DAC,"some students could think that they could make an assignment just as equally as efficient themselves just as teachers would, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c8f56d86b167,EBD36D034DAC,"teacher-designed projects would be more efficient regardless since it could be more helpful to teacher because it could be based on exactly what the teacher wants to know about what the student knows to help them succeed for the rest of the school year. And most summer assignments are different depending on the class too. If a student is going into a class they've never taken before, how could they make up a student-designed summer assignment to help them when their teacher could just give them a direct summer assignment as a jump start for the school year. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fd4984bd5d93,EBD36D034DAC,"Teacher-designed jump-start summer assignments are just less problematic, more reliable, and reasonable for everyone overall.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+68f1aee58746,EBDFD68450A0,there are many benifits of doing this act. At the same time there might be some small downsides to going on this trip. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+27c198f3546a,EBDFD68450A0,if you get sick easy you might not go on this trip ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffec78be3d75,EBDFD68450A0,Lets just get the not so good facts out of the way. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+584ee8097a10,EBDFD68450A0,"If you are allergic to animals with fur or just animals in general this is not the job for you. Because you are going to be on the ocean, if you sea sick easy. Do not do this job. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8570887c2ce,EBDFD68450A0,These are the terrific things about going on this trip. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6be35ee76af,EBDFD68450A0,"Well first of all you get to meet new people. Also you can get to know animals and lear ablout animals, too. So this will help you if you plan to work with animals when you grow up. You get to travel to new and incredible places that you haven't been to before. If that does not grab your attention then I still have more to tell you how amazing this would be! ""The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy."" Stated Luke. Luke had fun you would, too. If you think you had fun working with the animals on the boat, just think about what incredible things you do when you unload all the animals. Well I will tell you what they do. The cowboys play baseball, and volleyball, boxing, fencing, and so many other games when there are no animals on the ship. This is also a good time to get to know people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a7db2b98bc3,EBDFD68450A0,"So do you think that you are going to join now? All the games and fun you have. All the people you meet. It's amazing what you can fing on a trip like this. Isn't it? I think it's facinating what you will learn, see, do, and discover. I will leave the chose up to you now.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b92ad79b36e5,EC12EE97A834,I think that having communityes without cars is great for the inviroment and if people want to do that then good for them. but i dont think i could survive with out a car ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+40c33c9015d2,EC12EE97A834,"and i dont think many people could just to get to work it may take and 1 hour- 30 minutes to get there. but if there was a community where no one had a car and everyone rode there bike ir walked. Then there would be no reason to have a car because then all your job oppertunitys would be close by and you would not need to drive to get there. So i really dont see my self ever being able to go and doing somethuing like not using a car.
+
+but if thats what people want to do then thats good for them. i want people as a whole to be happy. i think that we can make our own decisions in our life and you know what people should not be judging someone else for there life decisions. its your life live it how you want i really makes me mad when people start getting mad at someone for something they have done because if it has already beeen done they cant go back and change it. it is already done and thats not cool. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a9c9647ad0d6,EC12EE97A834,i think that a community with no cars would be good but not for me and i think there will be a good ammount of people would not give up a car just so they could go run and bike places?         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4b1019ed1ef2,EC1DD5C739B9,"I wounder why Venus called the ""Evening star"" I think venus sometimes call the evening star because its a bright planet and it shine like a star & its the second planet from our sun. And venus referred to earth's twin because venus is the closest planet to earth ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a97cb4d468a5,EC1DD5C739B9,If I was an anstronount I would love to explore venus because it would be fun to be walking on venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5b25855b4e3c,EC1DD5C739B9,Most people should join venus just to see how it look and how is it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8c178d58e473,EC1DD5C739B9,"I think NASA
+
+as our jet airplanes travel at higher altitude to fly over many storms to go into space and explore many plants. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7d1054aa1255,EC1DD5C739B9,The national aeronautics and space administartion have done a great job when they go into space and discover planets ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a8f0bbceb0a6,EC1DD5C739B9,"I think it is very cool to go on other planets venus is sometimes closers to mars. The earth rotated its self and people dont nocited it.
+
+The sun is the hottest planet in the solar system it is over 100's degrees. Long ago venus was probaly coverd largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+157606a6f063,EC1DD5C739B9,"Today, venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth but venus is one of the best planet in the solar system. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d2f8a8f5b5e3,EC3DD758D9F0,"Venus, a planet, also know was Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky which is a misleading point since Venus is a planet thats is the second planet from our sun and often referred as Earth's twin due it being the closest planet to Earth in terms of its density and size and its occasionally distance as well. In space terms Venus is considered to be right around corner which has lead to humans sending many of their spacecraft to land their spacecraft on Venus which caused each previous mission to be considered unmanned mainly because no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours and as a result it explains the reason why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e62edf4c224f,EC3DD758D9F0,"nemerous factors contribute to Venus´sreputation as a challenging planet to study, despite is proximity to us. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+ed5d9bfd14b1,EC3DD758D9F0,Venus has conditions that are far more extreme than anything humans can encounter on Earth ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d2a78fa37a4b,EC3DD758D9F0,"also notable Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Mercury planet surface temperature averages over 8000 degrees Fahrenheit and the atomsphereic pressure that is 90 times greature than we experience on our planet and such an environment would even crush a subermarine that is made to explore the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Venus has a thick atmosphere that is made of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and blankets Venus. The most challenging are the clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus´s atmosphere. Venus geology and weather introduces natural disaters such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes, which makes it harder to land on Venus without experiencing one of these dangers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e6de22dddf5f,EC3DD758D9F0,astronomers are fascinated by Venus because they believed it was once have been the most Earth-like planets ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f35ae88228d0,EC3DD758D9F0,"Astronomers also believed Venus was once covered largely with Oceans could have supported various form of life we may have not been familiar with just like on Earth. Venus also some things that are simlar to Earth such as the rocky surface that include familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can also be considered our nearest option for a planetary visit, which is a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92ebb19365d8,EC3DD758D9F0,Trying to exceed the challenges showned by Venus has its uses because human cruiosity will likely lead us into many equally problems in the futures. and our adventures on Earth should be limited by dangers and doubts but a determination of that should expand our very limits.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+41c8c6a30362,EC3DE6D436F2,having limiting car usage in this world wil be saveing yourself some great deal of money also save money for the system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+559c3c588095,EC3DE6D436F2,"for instance many expect public transport serving the suburds to play a larg role in a six-year federal transportion bill als one of the places for limited cars is apart in paris suggested that on monday mortorists with even numbered license plates are ordered to leave there vechlies at there home or get punish with a fine of 31$ the same thing will apply to odd plates the next day. studies shows that 4,000 people with cars had theire car impounded with a high fine plus tax in bogota cars have beeb banned with only buses and taxies are the only two transpotion are allwoed studies showed that fewer of americans are getting cars and driving less even lees and less people are getting licenses year by year studies are now pointing is americans passed peaking point? thats is still uncertain for now,some places in new york shows that bike sharing programs and ints shyrocketing bridge and tunnels tolls reflected thode new priorities as they do prolifered of cars sharing the same programs across the nation and we do see a high percentage of it droping down like apples. reaches showed that they found that young people that are driving decreased of by 23 percent since the year of 01 to 09 in an article i read showed that moblie world last year in oversees sports suggiested a business plan in a world in which vehicles ownership is impractical and public transporation save the system more money and lower the risk of danger. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3ee39bb7e1d3,EC7C81E59E9E,In many schools the physical expression of everyones face doesnt really matter to a computer. The communication with students and computers is a bad idea because it won't have good outcomes to many people involved ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5e05e37477a3,EC7C81E59E9E,The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+948fc5ad7cbe,EC7C81E59E9E,because it won't have any affect on the students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c917c1d5bb9,EC7C81E59E9E,it will cost a lot of money to build ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b109cf6cce2b,EC7C81E59E9E,and it will be completely useless. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+75a82b969fd5,EC7C81E59E9E,The use of this technology won't have any affect on the students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+045aeffe1677,EC7C81E59E9E,"Many of the students nowadays will not be surprised by this idea. This explains why the use of this technology won'þ affect the students. Another reason, is that if the use of this technology goes to the schools many students won't care. This also helps explain why the use of this technology won't affect the students. The students and their physical emotions towards others aren't important to them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0ed63bb53ce,EC7C81E59E9E,Having the use of this technology in school will cost too much money to build ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59e9bbcf0b18,EC7C81E59E9E,The cost's be a lot to program in each computer at very school. This explains that the school budget will be oout of hand. Also constructing a camera that detects emotion in a 3-D face model will be the most expensive piece to the computer. This reason helps explain why many of the computers would be expensive to purchase. Schools being able to buy this will cost way to much money and could even have a budget problem. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4ff2fa0b794,EC7C81E59E9E,Also the idea of using this technology in school is completely useless ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55bcfc7f490a,EC7C81E59E9E,"Many schools will have no point of having this being in their computer system. This is why many schools will most likely reject this idea. Another reaosn, is that schools will have no benfit of having this for their students. This is why having this new technology is completely useless. These reason show why the the use of this technology is useless. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f350fba60b54,EC7C81E59E9E,"The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable because it won't have any affect on the students, it will cost a lot of money to build, and it will be completely useless. The idea of even having this technology in our schools won't be good for the benefit of our schools and students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+532e17f58eea,EC8FCCDB698A,Venus is worth studying ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3947c68ac6b6,EC8FCCDB698A,"when they study it they called it an ""Evening Star"" also a ""twin"" of earth ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e993011cf002,EC8FCCDB698A,"It's the closest planet to earth, It is the closest in distence as well. Venus also has a 97% carbon diocide blanket, but on the surface its 800 degrees Fahrenheight. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+103e795ddd3a,EC8FCCDB698A,the conditions of the planet are like that its way to extreme for humans to live there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0925b9179506,EC8FCCDB698A,"Venus is also has the hottest suface temperature in our solar system, even thou Mercury is closest to the sun Venus is till hotter. It has eruputing volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequesnt lightning strikes that happen on the surface of the planet ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+172e614dfa40,EC8FCCDB698A,"Scientist think that long ago Venus was like Earth, but even now it still has some of the features that Earth has ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73dd3d4a589f,EC8FCCDB698A,One of the things is that they are still striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26aa79c9405c,EC8FCCDB698A,"So if there is a way that they are able to go there and get more samples from Venus, then maybe that might tell the scientist what might have been there before and help them out with the previous clues as what happened. They also didn't think about how fast the computers we have today would be. But they also said that just imagine exposing a cell phone, tablet to acid, or heat compatible of a metling tin, that must be what the heat is like on Venus. And since they can't be on Venus just orbiting or hovering safely they can't get the samples that they want from that distance. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9a6e460e1ca,ECD640058D57,Students should do their own kind of projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ba1ceca7956a,ECD640058D57,they can show they've learned over time and make it into a project where they show what they've learned. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9eb445ffe411,ECD640058D57,"If it was teacher- designed, it wouldn't allow kids to express what they've been learning when the teacher is giving them instruction on what do. When kids show what they can do and put into a project, it shows that they've really payed attention and understood the lessons over the years. Also, the projects can allow students to reflect on what they learned and make something creative out of it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dffda4e0d6a5,ECD640058D57,"My Friend Generic_Name, had to do a project over summer during middle school. Her teacher allowed them to do it on their own and see what they can do. At first, she was startled because she didn't know what to do. She asked me for help but i couldn't cause i was struggling as well on what to do. We started planning one day, and remembering what we've learned over the past year. The thing she remembered most was in her history class, her teacher taught her something valuable and it was "" You work hard enough, you can achieve anything in the world."" That stuck with her for 5 years and she still remembered it. So for her project she did something based on that quote. She designed a poster where it shows the quote and little pictures of each class and showing what she liked about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+665b1688046c,ECD640058D57,"In the end, She liked doing her own project without any instructions from her teacher. It made her think what she mostly remember from that year, and reflect on it. If she didn't have the confidence to do that, then who knows if she could've done it without her teacher's help. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d5e458eea0f,ECD640058D57,"My brother Generic_Name, when it was his last year of high school, his teacher made him do a project on what they have learned and remembered most out of their 4 years of high school. The thing he remembers most was his mechanical teacher having faith in him and telling him he could do it when no one believed in him. In his project, he made a poster based on his teacher and something he said "" You believe in yourself, you can accomplish anything what the world gives you."" During those 4 years, he struggled with school. He though he couldn't do it and he didn't even know what he was going to do after high school. But when he joined this mechanics class, he fell in loved with everything. All his time was invested into mechanics. His teacher saw potential in him when he first walked into class. Then one day, his teacher called him up and asked what he wants to do after high school, He had no answer because he didnt know what to do. So his gave him a opportunity to get an interview with this company he know and worked their before. And at first he was speechless, because no one in that school believed in him and thinks that he wouldn't do nothing with his life. So in the poster, he wrote a passage on why he fell in love with that class and he added pictures of him and his teacher working together ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8010e3af2e44,ECD640058D57,"It showed that, with someones faith you can and you will achieve something great out of life. If no believed in him, then he wouldn't be working in that company that his teacher told him to join and he wouldnt be doing nothing in his life that he would've liked. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae83d0040693,ECD640058D57,"My Best Friend Generic_Name, had a teacher that liked her personality and the way she made people feel loved and included when no one wanted to. At the end of middle school, her teacher asked everyone to do a project. So for her project, she did it on one person which it was about her teacher. Her Spanish teacher, was strict on students but never lost faith in each student she had. But something about her made my friend and her have a connection. My friend has a mom that supports her in everything, but her Spanish teacher never had a kid. So my friend Generic_Name was like a daughter to her. She felt like she had a bond like her mom. Then one day for parent's night, Generic_Name's mom went to her Spanish class, and her teacher and her mom clicked away. They've became best friends out of no where. She was surprised because she didnt know if they would like each other or something she thought wouldn't work out. They've been friend's for 8 years already, and have so much in common. Her teacher was a person she can go for anything and without one question be afraid to tell her anything. So for her project, she did a poster of her mom and Spanish teacher. The connection they have, no one in the world could have that. Her Spanish teacher was important to her because she felt alone sometimes and had no one to talk to and she felt like she can go to her and talk about her problems with her. They have a bond she won't forget ever. She added pictures and saying thank you for everything for and nothing less. And for helping her in her rough days and making them somewhat better ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a410d8df4085,ECD640058D57,"If no one helped her in her bad times or no asked whats wrong, then who knows if she still be in school. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+efa504da7d0e,ECD640058D57,"Although some might think, my friend Generic_Name, my brother Generic_Name, and my best friend Generic_Name. If they each didn't have a teacher who had faith in them who knows what they would be doing right now. They each had someone that cared and loved them when one wanna to. I think having that special someone can do wonders in life and help out a lot. So teachers should let their students do their own project without no instructions and let them rethink what they they have learned and make it into a project where they could lay out their ideas and make it into something wonderful.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e7a91f75b2f1,ECF8296772E9,In the story the aurther is describing why Venus is the 2nd Earth ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+adcd6737707e,ECF8296772E9,and there coomon and there diffrents and what would be the best matterial to use for the Vehicle Witch Nasa is working with some simplified electrons made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted for 3 weeks in such conditions . Then Nasa also has a nother project were they are looking to work with the old technology called mechanical computers werefirst envisioned in the 1800's and played a inportant part in the 1940s during the World war ll. But the reason for the old tecnolagy is because if we were to have a cell phone on Venus is because it would melt because of the acid or heat capable of meting tin. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fa4b84d3af64,ECF8296772E9,"You all so have people striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value ,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimedating endeavors. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3b5db773e234,ECFF63C8CC8C,The use of technology is not valuable when comes to reading emotions in classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5c1f865a1fa,ECFF63C8CC8C,because even though we express ourselves so easily however those of us with ability manipulate others and or manipulate the technology it self like hacking or reprogrammming data based and operating systems of the computer which by the way is softer that completly allows the hardware and software talk to each other examples of operating systems is Microsoft's Windows 10 and Apple's Mac os X or as I call it Mac os 10 because X in roman numbers means 10 can be hacked by viruses and malware and worst of all ransomware itself and we all know for every key you bet their is always a lock and vice versa why do you think computer security specialist exist to work and counter each other for sake of technology. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92c69bb91479,ECFF63C8CC8C,Also yes while emotions are mixed we may feel one emotion more than other when going through mixed emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89978b51013f,ECFF63C8CC8C,"ok I get that truly but when you say oh this person is 83% this and 9% this how can you accuratley say that when emotions aren't calcuated by math no we humans are too complex for that that's why we have people taking care of people not robots caring for people why it's because where made to be complex. That is like saying that weather guy like oh well its gonna be 60% chance of rain and thunderstorm here in the mid east of country no no not it all all because the weather guy only gets stuff right 80%-90% of weather right shoot weather people struggle to predict indiana weather because one season supposed be harsh and deadly potentional winter right while we may have that but like one day it wants be 60 degress fariheit like no its not supposed be that warm in indiana in winter when we think winter we think snow, hail ,snow storms , chilly winds any type extreme colds but warmth no no not at all partly cloudy ok sure some sunshine with cold windchill sure but extreme odd warmth for time of winter no ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c75511524082,ECFF63C8CC8C,because these technologies that help us as people aren't always helping like there is always something wrong with technology ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f08d966af4a,ECFF63C8CC8C,because we made the technology and one characteristic we passed down to technology and that is inperfection in fact we intentionally made the technolgy to some degree less smarter than us so we can always have room inprove ourselves and you wouldn't want something made to be a tool be superior to you right of course you don't so why use technology to replace humans why not except some things we have and here the thing paragraph number two even says I am right because you cannot calculate emotions with math no ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c570f5289cb,ECFF63C8CC8C,as also talked in paragraph number 3 emotions are discovered when our muscles move certain way our body instinctively tells us to do so ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+25ede17f22b1,ECFF63C8CC8C,"not fully instinctlively because our thoughts and nerves go so fast we sometimes in instant gratification stuff lose precious time to react when needed to and our nerves and speed of the nerves why we is limited by our very own fixed speed and thoughts and emotions and stuff. Also paragraph 4 says each facial expression is universal so even though we all have similar look when happy sad, angry , depresssed doesn't mean all angry and depressed people look same and we can hide or have our feelings mixed up with so much thoughts in our head that is happening. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+74c41e873e20,ED164A18D77F,"This is a vey informative article but i would like to list most of the key ideas inside of it. i would like to inform of the positive and negatives
+
+In the article there are many diffrent forms of evidence towards using this new technology in the classroom but i feel that some stick out more than others ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6339cb14c898,ED164A18D77F,"In parargraph 6 the author told of the technology using our facial expressions to calculate whether we are bored or confused and i feel that,that is a very good idea. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45f340ad8e6e,ED164A18D77F,"As a high school student i can relate to the lesson getting boring, confusing, or just too fast pace. I feel that if this machine was used to help make an ideal lesson plan for each student the percentage of students passing would increase. I would love to have something as inovative as this technology inside of my schools classrooms. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4159e67b5aca,ED164A18D77F,"I do support this but ; however, there is some things about this that do concern me as a student. Some students could be angered by the use of this new technology and want their old lesson plans back ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5f8adbecf243,ED164A18D77F,Some students like the fast paced lesson plan and will get bored of the change. in some communitys this would not be avaliable due to money problems. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15fcd15bb6d3,ED164A18D77F,"For the time being i think we should leave the schools how they are until we can finally bring this in for students in the future when its more avalible to everyone. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f8fab2803916,ED164A18D77F,In conclusion i feel that we should just leave everything as it is in our schools ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+494c8283c251,ED164A18D77F,i feel that the lesson plans have worked for over 60 years and they will continue working. i like the idea but i feel that its too ahead of some schools with low money. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d1f2b26cd3ed,ED7F7B6E4C8E,Being able to prove someones true emotion through a science method is a bright idea. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+999c5ef26676,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"Therefore, after reading about the Facial Action Coding System it is very benefical in many ways. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1fc89ff39cb2,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"In paragraph one the experts states that ""She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Meaning this data isn't just something from a lab science teacher this is acurrate data from a new coming modern software. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3d2d525846d,ED7F7B6E4C8E,Having a computer connect with humans on a different level than just historical information can only help the society. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9b6d6a37af0,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"Experts are only trying to better the way the human brian and body functions. In the text it states that Dr. Huang and Dr. Nicu are coming together to increase better communication between computers and humans. ""are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate"". These two master minds are making sure readers know every step by step it takes to create this software without doing any harm. For example ""computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the faces; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles"". Meaning the software must reflect off a human like body or it wouldn't function correctly. ""Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit"". After the doctors finds out what it takes for the software to be a sucess they then go deeper into networking with a psychologist. Reaching out to the creater of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) Dr. Paul Eckman. Knowing that this software isn't basic Eckman simply starts out with the software using only the six basic emotions, which are happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness. In the text it states that these facial expressions are world wide ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c9d84d41984,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal"", Experts say that the FACS can identify true emotions through a real face or painted one ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0b0ec8dbb1e,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"""the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real or painted face"". In paragraph 5 it states that experts studied closely to make sure a painted face could be useful with the software ""studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7969f5d6f6a9,ED7F7B6E4C8E,. This new software can help students function in the classroom when they are confused or bored they can easily get help rather than being ignored ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce6f7fc7b260,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored"" says Dr. Huang. Using this software can let others know when someone is genuine happy or if they are just putting on a show. ""They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one"". experts say in a real smile the corners of your mouth is lifted rather in a forced on your mouth is being stretched. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cb16a73d3c0,ED7F7B6E4C8E,"The Facial Action Coding System isn't only helping society grow it's helping science better as well ""making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions"". ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a7c31fcf0ca0,EDD12BA31EE3,Is venus worth it? Venus is a plant that is close to Earth. They call it Earths twin its the same density and size. Venus is closer to the sun than Earth is withc can make it dangerous for it to be explored. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c4ec5ed2dff8,EDD12BA31EE3,In the past they have tried to explore it they have sent numerous spacecraft to land Venus. Each of the missions have been unmanned. Since no spacecraft have even survied the land more that a few hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea56b4648966,EDD12BA31EE3,This explains why exploring Venus could be a good reason or a bad reason. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+31abb24ac012,EDD12BA31EE3,The passage states that they have been succesful in three decades. It is a very challenging plant for humans to study. The atmosphere makes it even worse to travel through it being 97 persent carbon dioxide. The preasure from it is 90 percent worse even on top of that it can reach up to 800 degrees fahrenheit. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d4c2a514f428,EDD12BA31EE3,Is the rish worth taking put humans in dnager just to explor the plant even if they are not sure of it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a67eca5bb90c,EDD12BA31EE3,"venus has the hotest surface temperaature than any other plant in our solar system. They say astrnomers are fascinated by Venus because its like Earth. NASA
+
+is also working on studying Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc17d05e851e,EDD12BA31EE3,They say Venus has value because human curiosity will likely lead into intimidating endeavors. They also say that even though there are dangers here that means that we shouldn't stop what we are doing we keep pushing. They also say beacuse of doubts they shouldn't give up. If a spacecraft can't stay there for more than two hours then how do you explore it with out having risks. This could put people in dnager. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac1053497f89,EDD12BA31EE3,"They shouldn't go Because of the risks, Some peopel might want to go because of the golory of acheaving that goal for NASA but its just not safe to risk exploring a plant that has bad condictions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fe1d9728a43,EDD12BA31EE3,In conclusion exploring a plant with 800 deagrees and 90 percet worse preasure than Earth. A spacecraft has not been able to land there more than two hous you need more than two hours to descover a plant. The risk is huge for exploring Venus. It is also the hotest plant in our atmosphere. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2bc71073061d,EDD12BA31EE3,They should not travel Venus at all to big of risk and a lot of doughts to even consider going. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+615347704fdd,EDF7F5BCBD05,"Extracurricular activities can be the thing that a student looks forward to doing that day, counting down the hours and minutes until school ends. They are a great place to interact with others and develop an interest or skill, where lasting friendships can be made outside of a student's normal social circles. The students have a greater control over how things are run, providing kids the chance to step into leadership roles. However, they are not for everyone. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0f8c8fdacce6,EDF7F5BCBD05,Students should not be required to participate in at least one extracurricular activity ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a17a69ec1195,EDF7F5BCBD05,"the school could not cover the wide range of interests students have, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+10f327b3dee9,EDF7F5BCBD05,"would waste time that students need, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2147e707ad1f,EDF7F5BCBD05,would ruin the experiences of other people participating in the activity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bc250e5a0037,EDF7F5BCBD05,"The point of extracurricular activities, after all, is to develop skills farther than what students learn in school. While some people with interests like football and journalism can join school-sponsored extracurricular activities like the football team or the school newspaper, other students enjoy more niche or specific subjects. Incorporating these subjects into school extracurricular clubs would be difficult due to high equipment costs, lack of space, lack of widespread interest, or several other reasons. For example, some students consider fencing to be their favorite activity. However, the equipment required to do fencing is expensive and prone to breaking. This may not be extremely hard for one person to afford, but starting a school fencing club would require the school to buy several sets. Furthermore, fencing also requires a 14 meter strip as well as extra room so other students will not get hit by any stray blades. The school's resources are limited, and could not sponsor an activity like this without the kind of support that only mainstream sports have. In the meantime, it is not fair to the students who fence to force them into another activity when they could be practicing fencing outside of school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d27158638015,EDF7F5BCBD05,"School already takes up a large chunk of the day, but by requiring students to do extracurricular activities, kids are forced to stay for one or two more hours doing activities that do not seem worth spending time on. If a student chooses to join an extracurricular because they wanted to and not because it was required, the activity wouldn't seem like a waste of time. For the other students, however, those few hours could be spent on homework, catching up on sleep, connecting with friends and family, or pursuing their interests outside of school. Many students are on sports travel teams, and they need the time to practice with their team. Some people take classes outside of school or just prefer to do activities they like at home. Although these students are not joining school clubs, they are still doing extracurricular activities and should be able to continue doing so without worrying about running out of time for homework or missing out on sleep. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40c8c59128eb,EDF7F5BCBD05,"Making extracurricular activities a requirement would cause people to join clubs without genuine interest in the activity. These students will show less enthusiasm and put in less effort towards club activities and can drag things down for other students. They could be unwilling to do work or serve as a distraction to other students. There is a similar situation in elective courses, where some students only select a course because they believe it will be an easy class. Those students tend to participate less or be loud and off-topic. During group projects, they don't contribute as much. For many other students, it is frustrating to deal with these people, especially since there is no common interest in the activity they are doing. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5320e4acfc12,EDF7F5BCBD05,"Requiring participation in extracurricular activities ultimately does more harm than good to students because it disregards that broad range of activities students enjoy and takes valuable time from students who should be free to choose how to spend it. It also detracts from the value of extracurricular activities- which are created by people cooperating and acting on a common interest -by adding people who don't enjoy the activity. Inspiring students to be curious and passionate should be the school's priority, but by requiring students to do an extracurricular club the schools are only boxing students into a mold that ignores the complexity and individuality of each person. Students are required to get an education that will help them survive as adults, but they should be able to decide which hobbies and skills they want to specialize in. In the end, the unique path they decide to carve out for themselves should be of their own making. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7c9e16ceb9e7,EDFF7735A6F7,"Many years ago NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around Mars, trying to get any photos of possible landing sites for it's sister ship known as Viking 2. As the spacecraft was taking these photos, they spotted a cohesive head. At first the scientists thought that it was probably just another Martian mesa, but the thing about this one was that it had very unusual shadows that made it look like and Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+789dfe875bbc,EDFF7735A6F7,"Days later NASA let the picture out for the world to see. The picture went viral within days. This had become one of the most famous talked about things in the world. It appeared in books, magazines, radio talks, shows, etc. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a2a403aa2733,EDFF7735A6F7,"There were very few scientists who believed the Face could've been an alien artifact, but photographing Cydonia became a major priority for NASA. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the very first time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b1dbe823264,EDFF7735A6F7,"At this time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team captured a picture of the Face that was very sharp and you could tell what it was. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+65f52a014cec,EDFF7735A6F7,"On April 5, 1998 many excited and anxious web surfers were waiting for the image to show up somewhere. The image did pop up but it wasn't what the web surfers were expecting. Most people were dissapointed when they found out that the picture of the face they had been waiting for, turned out to be just a natural land form. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abbc6094062e,EDFF7735A6F7,"What I have stated proves that the Face is a natural land form. It may have looked like a face in the blurred picture, but we now know that it was just a landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1a6f15d57fbf,EE0229233F51,"Venus is known as the second planet from our sun, it's sometimes called the ""Evening Star"" despite it wasn't a star at all. It was also referred as Earth's ""twin,"" since Venus is the closest with density and size in terms of Earth's. But, we really don't know alot about Venus. Now why is that we don't sent any rovers, satelites, ANYTHING to get some few informations about Venus for the last three decades?
+
+Because anything that touched the surface of Venus surrvived less than three hours. Which gathered the reputation as the as the challenging planet to study. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2d0dd24051d8,EE0229233F51,What is the challenges of studying Venus? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+85ae1c06f7a5,EE0229233F51,"Well, first of all, The atmospere of Venus has a THICK layer of carbon dioxide the covers 98% of the planet, in which makes Everything a much hoter place,but, to top it of with the atmosphere problem, the clouds in there have highly corrosive sulfuric acid. If we some how passes through the atmosphere, than we'll face ANOTHER problem with the ground. Since Venus is the second planet from our sun and with all those carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, the surface ground temperature is over 800 DEGREES FAHRENHEIT. In which with the surface and the atmosphere, it could basically melt many types of metal with no problem. Another Problem is that the atmosphereic preassure is 90x greater than our Earth, with that much preassure could easily crushed a submarine that is built to surrvive the deeper end of the ocean. From what we gather small information from our space craft, the geology of venus pretty much have erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a51e514c6e71,EE0229233F51,"Despite all of the troubles and challenges that Venus caused, many of the scientists, astronomers, and including the author themself think that it's worth all of the trouble to get s much information as possible to get to know more of Venus ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ca642fb9244d,EE0229233F51,"But WHY is it worth studying it? Well, Astronomers are fascinated and interested in the past of Venus as many of them has theorized that might've used to be a lot like Earth from long time ago, with Venus used to oceans that support life like ours. Another reasons why it's worth the trouble and money to study it is that Venus could be our next Planetery visit as our nearest option. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+208d4f91dfbc,EE0229233F51,"To me, I'd thought that it wouldn't be worth all the trouble to study more of this when we can study other planets like mars that support life better than Venus since it's surface and atmosphere wasn't as crazy as Venus'. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4247b0b51fed,EE377D38C330,"A lot of people don't know that this techonolgy nowadays could determine the way you feel, it could determine the emotions that peope feel. It also shows the emotions or feelings of others. People probably think that this some type of joke or laugher kind of way when its not there really is techonology nowadays that could detect it. There's probably many ways people can detect to read the emotional expressions of students. Some ways that you probably didn't even know of. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+41a55d57095f,EE377D38C330,"A lot of people wonder how this works they don't really know that one easy way to show emotion or to show how you feel is by looking at them and looking at their actions. Once you have already seen them and that they are feeling some kind of way that's when you realize that there is something going on or that their sad or happy or that they are just going through stuff. People know that by the facial expressions on their face. They say that us as humans perform the same impressive ""calculation"". Some people struggle or have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried,sad,etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13f9f8c94bf2,EE377D38C330,This would be one easy way students can detect emotions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5ec275def16f,EE377D38C330,Parents probably disagree about using technology when showing their emotions. Not just parents but maybe some students wouldn't like it either ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e228ae822955,EE377D38C330,but if they think about it instead of waisting your time just guessing what their emotions are you would know if they use the proper techonology. They had made a process that began when the computer constructed a 3-D computer model of the face and it showed that all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c29a64b0b033,EE377D38C330,"Another interesting thing that they discovered was that Dr. Paul Eckman was the creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). He had classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. It also associated each with characterestic movements of the facial muscles. They invented somethIng else called video imagery, the new emotion software is that they track facial movement ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f9e19767fc1,EE377D38C330,As you can see its so easy to see their emotions or how they feel. They even show different weighting of units. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e79ebdbfe4b2,EE377D38C330,The author says that the Mona Lisa demonstrates is really to bring a smile to peoples face while it shows how much the computer can do. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e057fa54073f,EE377D38C330,"It would be really strange if a computer can tell you if your happy or sad. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7a98ba3e3437,EE377D38C330,In my opinion parents and students should get the idea of using techonology ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2c3731c3f841,EE377D38C330,its way easier to detect peoples emotions instead of just guessing or thinking you know how they feel. They shouldn't have a problem trying to make the place better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2f439152f59c,EE6CE96959D4,I have mixed feelings about the FACS technology it could be great now but when people or robots with their own minds want to do bad or harm the people of the world this would be a great start. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bdcbab229146,EE6CE96959D4,"See, now this could be used as something just for fun then it's gonna get upgraded to federal level and be able to decieve criminals. Then a deranged rogue is gonna get the hold of it and try to take over the world ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+651d8f5d202d,EE6CE96959D4,"Sounds like a movie doesn't it, but stuff like the FACS were in movies way back when and now have we them in real life. I can't be the only one that sees this happening. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b301c067087b,EE6CE96959D4,But the good side I heve for this technology is that it can help people. Or help people to help other people. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d49bd1337e03,EE6CE96959D4,"Like such, what if our friend is acting wierd. Which they commonly do. Just out of the ordinary behavior like being more quiet or not wanting to spend as much time with you as usual. So you trick i mean tell them stand in front of your wierd computer, your FACS. They do it, it scans the 44 major muscles in their face. It tells you that she's 20% mad, 10% happy, and 70% sad. So now you help her with he predicaments and you guys live happily ever after. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c21f23e98ca,EE6CE96959D4,Some other ways the FACS may be good invention is that it can be used as a lie detector ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+edd71f4ac571,EE6CE96959D4,As said in paragraph 8 you use different muscles for a genuine smile than for a false or fake one. It can be used by the FBI in interviewing or interogation. Or you could see when a politician is faking it also conveyed in pagraph 8. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9455891e6e3b,EE6CE96959D4,"So yeah, I dont really know how to feel. There's bad good way this thing couls affect the world. But there's pro and cons to everything I guess. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c2c57d639abc,EE71095197E1,"Imagine being able to detect what other people are feeling? She's 83 % happy,9% disgusted,6% fearful and 2% angry. How does this computer tell all this information if this painting was painted hundred of years ago? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+95779b3fff0a,EE71095197E1,I think it would be a great idea to tell how people are feeling. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+21595b1a8bf0,EE71095197E1,"Because someone might be having a bad day and you might not know, but if you could read facial expressions you would know. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+555561b2069c,EE71095197E1,"This computer than could tell you how Mona Lisa was feeling is a 3-D constructer computer. In oreder for it to detect a painting,Picture, or even an actual person's face Right now it has to have all 44 muscle movements of a human. the only thing i'd change about this experiment is instead of making everything nowadays computerized and robotic why dont we do this with paper and pencil, collect data and figure it out,if it doesn't work on the first try then change your hypothnose and do the experiment all over again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6164203610b1,EE71095197E1,My final conclusion is that decoding people's facial expressions is pretty neat. It gives us a look at the past and present day of people's reactions and expressions. They also told us how to look in the mirror and dot eh 3 steps by yourself and see if you can decode your own facial expression. This article was pretty interesting and I would like to look forward in more details about this.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99ebbdf380ad,EEBA14D4C42B,"Have you ever wondered about natural formations? You would think that someone or something had to help form it, right? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2d31b3deec34,EEBA14D4C42B,"As a NASA scientist, I'm here to tell you that these strange, yet amazing things can happen on there own. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c0d10e49ca15,EEBA14D4C42B,There are some people that do not believe in natural landforms in other planets. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9c40e48f78e,EEBA14D4C42B,"In 1976, an image from a satellite-related object took a photograph of a piece of Mars. In the image, there was a piece of land which appeared to look much like a human face. Once NASA reveiled the shocking news, Many people did not believe them. Humans thought that aliens were the ones who contrusted such a thing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a16bd8a1fcf,EEBA14D4C42B,NASA has more than enough facts and evidence to prove that it was made naturally. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f850d0a7d7da,EEBA14D4C42B,"The article says ""Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars."" This means that the landform was made by natural occurances. The landform is natural. The passage also says ""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, reavealing... a natural landform. This means that there was no alien monument after all."" There is much more proof of this landform being natural than there is being made by aliens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0708a502b3e7,EEBA14D4C42B,"Others say, that aliens made this formation. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6f545148a6a4,EEBA14D4C42B,"The article states that ""Conspiracy theorists say that the Face is evidence that NASA would rather hide."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c08636187649,EEBA14D4C42B,"The thing that they do not realize is the fact that they have no proof of NASA ""making up"" a story like this. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+078353e8b84f,EEBA14D4C42B,Theorists have not studied the landform as much as we have. How can people think that the Face is created by aliens when theres absolutely no proof of their existance? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e63c72cc3ba9,EEBA14D4C42B,"Making up fake stories for publicity is extremely wrong. If theres no evidence of something being fake, than just belive that it is real. Theres more to the world than people think and believe. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+720caabe6ee6,EEC492D89CEB,The first thing im gonna talk about is in the store it sayed they took there right to drive away and fined them if they do drive that is stupid. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b101411b962a,EEC492D89CEB,"If u pay for that car or truck and pay for the the gas that they sale you should be able to drive that car or truck wherever u want to. And if they new it was gonna cause harm to the environment then why did they do it i mean that's pretty dumb. They new that them hazardous gasses and fumes were gonna mess things up so why would they do it.
+
+But u have to have these vehicles and semis to be able to transport goods from place to place do i mean your really just gonna have to deal with it cause u have to have them cause whose gonna hall all that stuff by hand one by one nobody and its just a waste of time cause u would kill yourself trying to do it so why not just use a semi that uses left over stuff from gas that way there not dumping all that stuff out on the ground ans its not going down and pouluting our water let it puluote our air but if we don't have that water we couldnt go 3 days and we could were gas masks if it come down to it its really not that big of a deal.
+
+There making this how smog thing a big deal they can come up with something to help that or go away that is just so stupid that they do that cause they can prevent some of it with safe idle and emmisind but they dont want to hold to there laws ad people that are doing it they just let them go on like there doing and they do nothing about. Why would they do wat they are doing and not help us out and quit taking our rights away.       ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c8f5678ee2b6,EEC9540E73FD,Some schools have debated if they should make every single student participate in extracurricular activities. I believe that they should not make kids do extracurricular activities they don't want to do. It would be extra work for the school and it would be bad for the students. If the principal decided to change the school's system so that each and every student would have to do an extracurricular activity it would end up negatively for most students. The main reasons it would be bad are ,Lead,Effective,,,
+558ff2e12cd7,EEC9540E73FD,"many children will not have the time to do work they shouldn't have to do, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+52141956ab27,EEC9540E73FD,"kids are already stressed enough with their school work and other things, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+36c2299cb379,EEC9540E73FD,many kids who are being forced into doing this probably wouldn't enjoy these activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8ed6af5c4c90,EEC9540E73FD,I believe that we should just keep our school's system the same and the school should not make someone do an unnecessary activity that they didn't want to take part in in the first place. ,Position,Effective,,,
+1ad5bac629d9,EEC9540E73FD,"While some may say that kids have too much free time and we should give them something to do so they aren't on electronics, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e3504a412f07,EEC9540E73FD,"I strongly disagree with that statement. I am a student, and a majority of my peers take part in many other activities, such as sports, musical instruments, plays, and any other things along those lines, that wouldn't allow them to have any spare time to do another activity. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+03de0e67b265,EEC9540E73FD,"In fact, according to a study performed by Harvard University, almost 85 percent of students participate in after school activities that take up more than 8 hours of time per week. This would include practicing the activity and for many activities you would have to compete. For example, one of my friends, Generic_Name, does many activities. She plays on a competitive lacrosse team, she plays a musical instrument, and she takes all honor classes. She barely finishes all of her homework, and she has stupendous time management skills. If she had to take part in another after school activity, she wouldn't have time to do it all. Because kids do other things, if you made them partake in a new activity they would also become a lot more stressed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+36f1ceee6271,EEC9540E73FD,"If you make them participate in another activity, that will make their stress levels go up and could possibly push them over the edge. It's obvious that students won't have the best time management skills because they are kids. Since they don't have these skills, they will end up being stressed about completing their work. In a survey I compiled with seventh and eighth graders at my middle school, I discovered that a whopping 94 percent of students considered themselves stressed. 76 percent even went as far to say that they are overly stressed. This puts into perspective how students are already very stressed without the excess activities. Personally, I partake in a travel volleyball team, a musical instrument, all honor classes, I make sure that I study enough and do all of my homework, and I make time to spend maximum amounts of time with my family and friends as possible. I manage to finish all of this, but many days I do not get much sleep. On most week days I get about 6 hours and the recommended amount of sleep for a thirteen year old is about 8. It can get very tough to finish all of my tasks I have to complete in one day. I know that if my school made me participate in another extracurricular activity I would not be able to complete all of this work I previously had to finish. And obviously school would be my top priority to complete, so I would possibly have to drop some of my hobbies and interests that I love. Another reason we shouldn't enforce this rule is that many kids that the school is forcing to do the activity probably won't enjoy it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dc5599f73c93,EEC9540E73FD,"The main extracurricular activities that people partake at my school are plays and clubs where you can compete in, such as Model United Nations, debate club, Science Olympiad, and many others. At my school with over 1,000 students, only about 100 decide to join these clubs. These clubs only appeal to certain people that enjoy academics. If you're interested in things related to sports, my school does not have much to offer for you. When my sister was in middle school, about 7 years ago, they had very few clubs. They had 3 official clubs. Our mom made her choose a club to participate in. All that she could choose from was debate club, chess club, and homework club.
+
+She had little to no interest in doing any of these clubs that she thought were boring and dumb. She ended up doing chess club, but she ended up hating it immensely. She said that everyone was better than her and she didn't even know how to play. This all happened because she was forced to pick an activity from three, horrible sounding, activities. This all would not have happened if no one had made her do an activity she despised. The same thing will end up happening to many children if the schools make them participate in activities they don't wish to do. Kids doing something that they don't want to do will end up with them being unhappy, which will end up in a negative learning environment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f35036530d91,EEC9540E73FD,"Many kids will suffer majorly if a school was to go through with this ridiculous plan of forcing people to do an extracurricular activity that they do not wish to take part in. In the end, this will benefit basically nobody, because if someone really needed or wanted to participate in extra activities, they could without having to affect every person other than themselves in the school. Many would be upset with this new plan, so I believe that it would be best to keep our system the same. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+74ed23544122,EED67869F816,The face on mars is a rock formation. No aliens made it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+073de8d96de0,EED67869F816,We have seen it and belive that it is just a mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae881a3ff7c5,EED67869F816,Some people are against nasa and sa that it is aliens. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+30e881a433e2,EED67869F816,In 1976 are satilite the viking 1 was orbiting mars and takeing pictures of the planet. When we looked at them we noticed this one. A picture of a face on mars. When we noticed it eas just a mesa in the face. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de44947b3826,EED67869F816,Ther is some like this one in the west. ONe is the middle butte in the snake river plain of Idaho. Some people say that nasa is hideing that there is life on mars and they say there is not. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69a7f1d20bad,EED67869F816,So that is why we are telling people that it is a mesa. We don't want them to freak out that aliens excicst when they do not . We also wish there was an acient civilization on mars. In conclusion it s just a rock formation. That was there for a long time that shadows made us think it was a face. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5dc1961533e2,EF08234FA6BE,"The article ""A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves"" talks about a boy named Luck who recently graduated high school. Luck worked two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank, when Don Reist Luck's friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat Luck could never said no, because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.
+
+To help the European cuntires recover from World War 2,the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration hired ""Seagoing Cowboys"" to transport the horses,young cows,and mules Luck and Don signed up.
+
+Luck and Don received their ordes to repot to New Orleans, they arrived August 14,the day the Pacific War ended. They were headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.
+
+Luck had just turned eighteen before they arriving in Greece. By the time he was discharged in '47
+
+Luke had made nine trips. To past the time on return trips they would play baseball, volleyball,table-tennis tournaments,fencing boxing ,reading whitting and games also helped to pass the time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f4d889ad8cd,EF08234FA6BE,Luck had the most amazing two years of his life. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+796964b59e04,EF70A0E7826B,I will have to say no because you can't use technology to see someone emotional. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9c55cf9df23b,EF70A0E7826B,what if you try to see if someone is happy but it come up with an erorr on your computer. like ib the text said that some comupter can't do it. so i say why can't some comupter can do it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79b4752fb14b,EF70A0E7826B,so what i think is that technology can't tell show how we feel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9beaa7116691,EF70A0E7826B,how we feel can't be calculat by technology. in some people may say that it is not right to think that technology can so how we feel. sometime technology can like stop working what are we going to do now that it's not working know more. what i think is that this is not smart todo because what if technology chage what they are feeling like lying to them like that are really happy but it change to say that they are sad but they are not. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5aa17967786a,EF70A0E7826B,so tell me this what do you think we should do keep on leting technology teel us how we feel or go deep down in your heart in tell yourself how you really feel. but i don't thing that the people that say yes we should let technolgy tell us what we should feel. they are never goingto give up on leting technology tell them how they are going to feel. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c24853d1fbeb,EF7631952FB3,"When you think about Venus ,do you think about Oceans or Mountains? With the new and the old technology they can figure just about anything out. Venus is considered Earths ""Twin"", but should it be ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9b0d7e73fefb,EF7631952FB3,"Venus is know to be one of the more dangerous planets, but it should not. In the passage paragraph 4 it says "" Long ago, venus was probably covered largerly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92c8f75027c9,EF7631952FB3,"Venus hasnt always been bad, or dangerous becase it used to be just like Earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab718bb6020d,EF7631952FB3,"Humans live on Earth so Humans could have lived on Venus, which makes it not dangerous. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1586f90bdff,EF7631952FB3,Another reason Venus should not be considered dangerous is becase of the technology they can use to see if it is ok for people to be there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46cd01d521ec,EF7631952FB3,"In the 1800s they used to use mechanical computers. This device could do calculations. In the passage in paragraph 7 it says "" These devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all."" This is showing that technology can help people see if the planet is dangerous or not by using the power and flexible and quick power it has. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57f282dc92c3,EF7631952FB3,Venus should not be considered dangerous. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+518eb05e0e93,EF7631952FB3,"In todays time our technology has improved and its surface has goten to be mountains, valleys, and craters. All in all Earth and Venus are twins. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8f9b7edc1068,EFA46BC5A89A,Does the Facial Acton Coding really identify humans emotions ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d7105dff4196,EFA46BC5A89A,The Facial Action Coding really helps identify human emotions ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+11543d01ac69,EFA46BC5A89A,"Since some people can't identify or know if your happy,sad,angry,surprise,shock,disgust, and scared they won't be able to know your emotions. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a0bd4a11f071,EFA46BC5A89A,"Let me tell you how it works, the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. All and every 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. The movement of one or more muscles is called an ""action unit."" The Facial Action Coding will really help you identify your own emotions, family, and friends ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+832c6bd15af3,EFA46BC5A89A,But some people will start thinking about the Facial Action Coding will malfunction on them and they won't be able to identify their emotions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0e9f7ed41900,EFA46BC5A89A,The Facial Acion Coding identify emotions from paintings and on human. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e98123a0653,EFA46BC5A89A,"The software can even identify mixed emotions as in da Vinci's masterpiece. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. We humans perfrom this same impressive "" calculation"" everyday. ""Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to covey specific emotions."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1efca23f9137,EFA46BC5A89A,"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intened to bring a big smile to your face, while it shows how much this computer can do. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bab52b1e76b5,EFA46BC5A89A,"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar add might follow. Dr. Huang predict that "" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" Another prediction that Dr. Huang did was that ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" Every human or most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bbe528b1382f,EFD99673780E,"Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping pictures of possible landing sites for Viking 2, then it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end. It seemed to be staring back at the cameras on Viking 1. These photos were taken from the region of the Red Planet called Cydonia.
+
+Viking 1 took a picture of something call a butte or mesa. They're most common in the American West. It's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on mars. Their is one in the Snake RIver Plain in Idaho.
+
+On April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.
+
+""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 rimes larger than the pixel size. If there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" said Jim Garvin.
+
+The picture actually shows is the Martian Equivalent of a butte or mesa. This landform is most common in the American west. ""It reminds me most of the MIddle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" says Jim Garvin.      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4fb0d7c2aec,F038426B8B5A,Some Schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Projects are used to enhance learning in a different way. During the summer no student wants to work on school work or even think about school. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+726f3ef917b0,F038426B8B5A,summer projects should be teacher- designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f50ac693eb7e,F038426B8B5A,"students may take a while to come up with a project or idea, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a3749d9ef1d7,F038426B8B5A,"teacher- designed projects are already made and ready to go, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f465e0e6e42f,F038426B8B5A,Projects would be less confusing when made by the teacher themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+13163264e417,F038426B8B5A,"Students are in school at least 8 to 9 months or for some students all year around, so when it comes to summer break students are ready to relax, go on vacation, or just sleep. Students already have done tons of projects for classes or even just for one class and those projects are very stressful for some. Summer in a lot of cases are relax time and forget about school time so when they are given a project to do a lot would just put it to the side and dont do it at all. When coming up with ideas on what to do some will not know or just not even try that's why it think it should be teacher-base. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c26047a01a2,F038426B8B5A,"If students are given the instructions and already know the idea it makes it a little easier to get done over the summer. Students tend to procrastinate and take their time, which they should, but that time may be at the last minute. It could be August and they have to go back to school that following week and haven't even came up with an idea yet. Teacher-based projects already have the idea and the instructions on how to do it and it saves time depending on the project. Students can still not do it at all but at least they have the foundation on what to do and start it and have it done with in weeks or days. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+110e91d855aa,F038426B8B5A,Students already dont want to do the project in the first place so the idea may be very confusing to other students or the teacher. If the project is a group project the idea may not be understood fully and may get taking the wrong way. Students school brains are already shut down so when to making ideas students tend to wing it and just throw it out especially when it is a group project. They think that the other is just going to figure it out on their own and that may not be the case or they leave each other hanging. Teacher- based projects make it easier because the idea and instructions are already there and all the students have to do is just follow them. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+0c99211bd3ef,F038426B8B5A,Teacher-based projects do have a downside to them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b4cae63e78ec,F038426B8B5A,"Teachers, of course, have been teaching and assigning projects all year and some are easy and some are not. Projects that are given by the teacher have to be completed by the instructions given and if it is not completed that way or in that way all that hard work just went down the drain. Student- based project do make it easier because it is their idea, their instructions, and their own way. So all that hard work doesn't have to go the drain for nothing. Student-based projects can be more creative because it is made from scratch and from their own head. Teacher-based projects are usually less creative because students are just trying to finish it and get it over with. In contrast, students may take a lot of time or wait till the last minute. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a3d4c84f3bd,F038426B8B5A,"Teacher- based projects or student based projects can all be very good projects. Summer projects can be challenging because the summer is relaxing time, even though all of adults think otherwise, but summer projects do keep the brain fresh. I think that summer projects should be teacher based because it makes it easier on them and the students.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cbd89d2e8fe2,F038AB4D788D,"This essay is about phones and driving. Phones are devices that allow you to communicate with each other. Now modern technology phones allow you to download apps and different types of social media that you can talk to or meet different people around the world.
+
+Cars allow people to travel long distances in a short period of time.
+
+Nowadays cars are being used for everything and there are many different types of cars to help get the job. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+902d210c943a,F038AB4D788D,There are many people using phones to communicate with one and the other or taking pictures to post on social media. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f63861de81d1,F038AB4D788D,"Phones nowadays are getting harder and harder to put down. Phones have app stores that allow you to play games, different social media, and Youtube/other streaming content. By having these on your phones, you will also get addicted to playing your favorite game, checking to see what's new or people's status on social media, and seeing what people are streaming about on Youtube or what episode/movie you miss. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08a784b902cc,F038AB4D788D,Driving can be learned at the age of 16 in most countries. Some people can learn at different age groups by their parents or they can go to a driving school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+617745cd2bb7,F038AB4D788D,Today age driving is one of the things you need in life if you travel a lot and go from place to place. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+87dc6fcfe0c9,F038AB4D788D,"Cars can help you travel long distances, can hold more than one/two people, and cars can be used as storage by helping by holding grocery or holding the thing in your house because you're moving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c10b79684cb2,F038AB4D788D,Phones and Driving can be extremely dangerous. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b81a4dc2678,F038AB4D788D,Driving needs your full attention and phones are an addiction that people constantly get destricted by the driver. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0d7111eb584,F038AB4D788D,"Drivers constantly get destructed by text messages, games alert, social media updates, and other. Textingand driving or driving and getting distracted by their phones are the most common thing that killed people and having car accident. Most of these things that are happening are caused by teens. Teenagers are the number one reason texting and driving are happening and going on.         ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9bda30b8f95c,F03E03FE5D3C,The technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is a wonderful idea in my opinion. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e8aa07cf619e,F03E03FE5D3C,The computor for the students can be a interesting dissision for video imagery. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ef869df44c5a,F03E03FE5D3C,"The author explain""Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa""(Makeing Mona Lisa Smile 4). It proves that the video imagery can be a interesting thing because the software can tract facial movement if it's real or not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c75d3c62f65d,F03E03FE5D3C,Anothor thing about the computor for the students can read the student's emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f6aaacb4402f,F03E03FE5D3C,"The author states"" The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computor can do""(Makeing Mona Lisa Smile 6). It shows that the facial expressions can be read by a computor because the computor can know when you are feeling happy,sad,mad,etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04df3aa7b898,F03E03FE5D3C,The last thing about the computor for the students is that they can be a reowned drama coach. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+25541325e5f2,F03E03FE5D3C,"The artical saids"" Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage. Empathy may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions""(Makeing Mona Lisa Smile 9).Therefore it explains that the computor can be a reowned drama coach because the computor is carfully produce of the emotions on stage. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+16bf5976b044,F03E03FE5D3C,In conclusion the computors reading emotions are a best idea in time and only time will tell if we can create artifitial intellegence to the computor for the best in the world. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fec643e26c0a,F065FD9F8D5F,"Humans are so diverse. Some may be similar, but none are the exact same. Students are no different, even though they may be learning the same information, the way students understand and learn that information can be vastly different. Teachers help students learn materials through a variety of methods, like projects and tests. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+36439f7326ea,F065FD9F8D5F,"Schools that require students to complete summer projects should make the projects student designed, proving that there are many different ways of learning. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+4b92d231643c,F065FD9F8D5F,"Depending on the student, some methods of learning are incredibly more beneficial than others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e810d9927e85,F065FD9F8D5F,"When I learned vital concepts such as multiplication, the way my teacher taught was through constant out loud repetition of the material, which helped my classmates along, but not me. I needed to see the problem worked out and look at the numbers because I had trouble picturing all the math and numbers in my head. Not being able to understand that basic concept of multiplication was detrimental to my math abilities and led the following years of my math career to be absolutely exhausting. This same scenario could take place involving summer projects. A teacher could give a student a summer assignment to help them learn about a concept in that class, but if the design of the assignment was difficult for the student to understand, it could be more hurtful than helpful. The entire reason teachers and schools assign projects over the summer is to assure that students will continue to learn during their break, but how are the students supposed to learn if they can't understand or have trouble with the assignment? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ab09ac214190,F065FD9F8D5F,"Projects are meant to provoke students to think, and having students design the project themselves is a great way for them to think more and therefore learn more. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9976a4e3f732,F065FD9F8D5F,"If students designed a summer project, they would have to think about what to do since they most likely won't have as many guidelines that a teacher typically would give. This allows students the opportunity to be creative and think outside the box. Students could then potentially learn a lot about themselves and not just whatever the subject of the project is. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+900ef0b9b2fa,F065FD9F8D5F,"If the student creates the project themselves, it seems more likely that they would actually enjoy the project. And if they enjoyed doing the project, they will remember it more. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+db9863cfcffd,F065FD9F8D5F,"I don't remember the material from my psychology summer assignment this year. All we had to do was research and write about a basic concept from psychology. I do, however, remember the Latin project I did in seventh grade. I think this is because I was allowed to do the project on anything related to Latin that I wanted. All my teacher asked of us was that the project was somehow Latin related. I decided to do my project on ancient roman customs, specifically the different rituals performed as a person reaches certain ages. From that project I remember things like that at six months old a young roman boy gets a round pendant called a bulla to protect them from evil spirits and when they reach age twelve the receive a new type of toga and more. I could not tell you about the five methods of observation used in psychology, which is what my summer assignment this year (11th grade) was about. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6467adee7ee8,F065FD9F8D5F,Some may argue that having students design summer projects is a bad idea because the typical student is lazy and will make an easy project design so that they won't have to actually learn anything. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f322f974ac20,F065FD9F8D5F,"If this is true, having a teacher designed project does not change that situation. The reality is that if a student is lazy and doesn't want to learn, they will not learn. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+50b7a2b32ca3,F065FD9F8D5F,"For my psychology summer assignment, I was lazy during the summer and did not want to do it, but eventually I did it the day before they school year started and learned nothing because it was boring and I wanted to get it over with. However, if the assignment was to research anything I wanted about psychology, perhaps it could have turned out like my 7th grade Latin assignment and I would've actually learned something. From personal experience I can say that the best way to combat an apathetic student is to gain their interest somehow, which could be done by allowing them the freedom to design their own project. For example, I loved reading
+
+Frankenstein in English, but after having to write so much about it I no longer like it and don't really remember much of what happened.
+
+Even if a subject is interesting, the desire to do a project on it can be crushed by the formatting of the project. Allowing students to do whatever format they want could make students gain interest and want to learn more about a subject compared to doing something they don't want, like writing an essay, which may make them harbor resentment toward the subject instead. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2496948968cf,F065FD9F8D5F,"If a school decides to assign a summer project, the students should be the ones to design them, which shows that there are many ways people learn. By understanding that some children need to be taught in different ways, people can better educate the youth of America. Improving the way the people are educated can give society more informed citizens who are confident in their abilities and work better and smarter.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eaa5276b4659,F068FD4A28D5,"Should people have the privilege and/or the right to be able to have their phone out inside the car? While there are some good reasons why you should have the right, there are some things that people just can't help. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+012c31e66323,F068FD4A28D5,We already can't stop all the people that use their phones while they drive and now a days more and more people are getting addicted to their phones almost making it impossible to put down even while just having a simple dinner let alone putting it down while there driving most people don't even realize that there even doing ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+23866f6d620a,F068FD4A28D5,most care now a days have the Bluetooth or people sell Bluetooth devices so you can be on call and drive while you drive making it better for the people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6238d79195aa,F068FD4A28D5,"but as tested on ""MythBusters"" changes a little but still distracts you in some sort of way people also know there way around things already and sometimes work or no most of the times it works but some of the times it doesn't ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1aa4b0d82854,F068FD4A28D5,"under a code of law because there are not enough laws in places or ""fine print"" and they can just say oh well it's like a Bluetooth but it wasn't type of stuff and the court can't do anything about it ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b83fdb21514,F068FD4A28D5,This is what I think about the phones calls and driving is may not be clear cause there really is no answer to this question for me personally I don't care what they do or say all I care about is if our people our safe there really is no reason for people to be not allowed to have there phones in a car or make calls or answer them ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7576955f0f64,F068FD4A28D5,maybe there should a cam in every car that shows whenever your texting and driving or have your phone up against your ear just so if the other person that gets hit they have the cam to see if there were texting or on a call whenever you are driving and get into accident (hopefully no) but still you would have the prove that they were on it meaning the phone or not. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fbb3748162d1,F068FD4A28D5,"They (cops) think they can just lie as well but with that cam they can't lie, or anything even know they shouldn't even if it's an exsaturration it still means something in the court of law it could either mean good or bad for the person testifying what they did or didn't do and with that cam there is no more lying anymore and takes away more problems like for example who/what happened before the crash how many people were really in the car and finally how they got hit and out of the car if camera is in correct placement in every car sadly they all have to be in different placement in each variety of car. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+262380ced9a8,F068FD4A28D5,This is what I think and what people should do about cars and phones the true ones would understand this message thank you so much for taking your time to read till again bye.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+325b42155165,F0740AF01F22,"Mercury is closer to Earth's sun, yet Venus is the highest temperature planet in the solar system. This temperature has presented many difficulties trying to put a person on the planet. Landing someone on Venus has not been succeded yet. Many scientist and astronomers are working on creating a spacecraft that will hold together, although all of the dangers that are presented ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ecab6d47fd4f,F0740AF01F22,"In the text of ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" it shows many dangers and reason not to put a person on this planet, yet if they succeed the outcome would be much greater and rewarding. Studying Venus is a pursuit that should be taken. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+404d7797ce2e,F0740AF01F22,The outcomes of previous attempts to put a spacecraft on Venus have been unsuccessful. The previous trys have only survived a few hours long. It only takes one very thought out and well planned try to be successful. It would be a great place to reach and put living organisms on ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+506dc4a30f6b,F0740AF01F22,Venus has many dangers although astronomers are trying to put a person on it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a4c64bd99d3,F0740AF01F22,Some of the dangers may seem unthinkable to put a person through but NASA is working on a spacecraft that will protect the person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c3e870f7282,F0740AF01F22,"They have so many advantages that are helping them succeed. The planet used to be covered in oceans and other forms of life. The text states, ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" This shows that it has similarities to Earth and has water and used to have other living organisms. The danger of not having any water or being able to hold any kind of life form is not there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d04b435758d,F0740AF01F22,The temperatures and the terrain of Venus are both dangers and good qualities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38fcd6b508ff,F0740AF01F22,"Although the danger of having such high temperatures around 170 degrees Fahrenheit the air pressure is around the same as Earth's. The text states, ""At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth."" This shows the air pressure would be subseptable for a human to land and be able to breathe. With the right spacecraft the temperatures can be avoided and would not be an issue. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d21c63df1d06,F0740AF01F22,Venus has similar terrain and weather conditions as Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2c607303d25,F0740AF01F22,"The similar features include rocks, mountians, valleys, and many more. The text states, ""The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountians, and craters."" This shows that the surface and ground are similar to Earth. This also shows great potential to land a spacecraft there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf875ff804fc,F0740AF01F22,The extreme weather conditions on Venus is also similar to the ones on Earth. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6463ef7d5167,F0740AF01F22,"The text states, ""Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent ligtning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."" This shows that the weather conditions are similar, so this would help the manufactures of the spacecraft be prepaired for the conditions and help build a better craft. Although there are many dangers with every advantage the Venus is still a good planet to try and put living organisims on. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3bd8f5d35caa,F0740AF01F22,"In conclusion, the studying that is being done on Venus and the more found out the less dangerous the mission will be. The advantages are much greater than the dangers. If they are successful then there will be another planet for people to live on. The similar weather conditions is a tremendous advantage. There being water already on the planet and the possibility of living organisms being on the planet shoes that it is possible. The possibilty of something great over rules the possibility failing. If the astronomers give up and say that the dangers are to big then they will never know if the dangers were not defeatable or not. Venus has all of these dangers but is a worthy pursuit to put living creatures on. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+57b7cd709e25,F074E15D7250,"Many people may argue about the advantages of limited car usage. ""When i had a car, i was always tense, im much happier this way"" (Source 1) ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aed0c3635f93,F074E15D7250,"Many countries including France, Colombia, and Germany seem to have no problem with limited car usuage ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24e85ce83a09,F074E15D7250,"Germany is one of the greatest countries that is against low car life. 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars. 57 percent sold a car to move Germany. (Source 1). In total their is approximatly 5,500 residents and has a low car life because their are less space for parking. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a0602e05e0c,F074E15D7250,"One of the most populated city in France is Paris. Paris enforced a driving ban to clear up the polution. A 22-euro fine was given if one failed to corespond with the rules. Around 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine . After 5 days of almost car free roads (not including bus and taxis) the traffic went down by 60 percent.(Source 2). The biggest problem of the smog was Diesel fuel. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France compared to the rest of Western Europe that has 53.3 percent average on Diesel. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9c98d7dee1f,F074E15D7250,"For 3 straight years, Bogota has been doing ""Day Without Cars"" that limites transportation only allowing buses and taxis. the goal for this day is to reduce smog in the capital city. Violators who failed to corespond was faced with a $25 fines. "" Millons of colombians hiked,biked,skated, or took the buses to work during this car-free day"" (Source 3). The whole family went to parks and sports centers to occupy their day. Even two others Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar joined in on this event. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6871f7d6881,F074E15D7250,What both countries are trying to do is limited cars so less polution. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a34eba6ec5d4,F074E15D7250,Their are other transportation besides cars that we can use. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5ec8bb3beb27,F0F0CD67E436,This technology to read and find out the emotinal expressions of students is crazy and weird. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+482c5f86c58a,F0F0CD67E436,Its spooky how looking at Mona Lisa picture can express yoiur emotions ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+85a5d4281159,F0F0CD67E436,"Shes actually smiling, but if your mad she'll look mad. So creepy how that works. I feel like they should'nt of told us that. Now when we look and think so deep about this picture we can be frightened, in our dreams or whenever. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0311c0230938,F0F0CD67E436,"Its talking about shes 83% happy and the rest of percentages are mad, sad and all them emotional feelings. They said with this software they can caculate emotions. The picture in the software uses 44 major muscles, and the model must move like a human. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbe6115ead01,F0F0CD67E436,"This is kinda smart to caculate emotions, and empressive with the picture where it really moves with 44 major muscles and tells you your emotions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6956b448fd9c,F0F0CD67E436,"Its true how we can tell how somebody feels by thier face expression, but not evreybody shows it. Some people must be going throught the roughest time in their life and still smile through it. So not everything can work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eede0f3baa99,F0F0CD67E436,"I like how the the software of Mona Lisa is really intended to bring a smile to your face, but sometimes it could creep you out. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b8dfe5e533e6,F15FFBB0E896,"In source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars states that street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden near the French and Swiss borders. Vauban's streets are completely ""car free"" as stated in the second paragraph. 57% of people sold their car just to move on Vauban's streets. When Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and a mother two said that ""when she had a car she was always tense. But is much happier this way.""
+
+Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of growing trend in europe. The United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called ""smart planning"" stated in paragraph 4. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up 50% in some car intensive areas in the United States. When you don't have a car you had to walk to get where you need to go. But when you get a car you dont think about walking because all you wanna do is drive. As stated in paragraph 9, in the United States the Environmental Prtection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities, and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously.
+
+In source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog, states that paris enforced a partial drving ban to clear the air of the global city. In paris on Mondays motorists with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22 euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd numbered plates the following day. Keeping the air clear is very important. 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to fine. Car traffic was down 6o percent in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog. All the smog rivaled Beijing and China which is well know as one of the most polluted cities in the world.
+
+Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bdf9be4393e8,F19978B8C2A7,"Being in class knowing that if the lesson gets boring on the computer, it can change it into a more interesting lesson for students ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad1cb098ddef,F19978B8C2A7,This machine created by Dr. Huang and his colleague prof. Nicu Sebe can impact students in ways that are good or bad. For some people it can be a good thing but for others it can mean a bad thing. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a7821dc87ed,F19978B8C2A7,The bad thing of this emotion recognition is that students with medical issues that affects their learning because of it affecting them from using technology. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+027206f36ec0,F19978B8C2A7,For u schools who use this technology have to focus on their students with medical problems that affects them from even using it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb3eadcbc288,F19978B8C2A7,Also another thing that schools have to worry about is the finance for the computers that break and has to be repaired. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+187e61716444,F19978B8C2A7,The good things about having this type of technology in schools is that it have more students be more interested in learning and can help them plan out what they would like to do in their future ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+251af5e9b453,F19978B8C2A7,"Having the emotion recognition can help students in advanced classes who struggling with their classes have a more easier way for them to pass and graduate with the diploma they wanted. This can technology can have more students graduate and have less high school drop-outs. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c156c876758e,F19978B8C2A7,"The emotion recognition can be a good thing for certain students and can be a valuable thing, but for other students it can affect they way they learn if they are more hands on or have a medical problem that makes them unable to use technolgy. Even though this machine created by Dr. Huang and prof. Nicu Sebe is a great thing for schools but it can have different impacts on students wether it's good or bad. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d5858000f203,F1AFDB5CEB25,"A Facial Action Coding System is where it sees if you're happy, sad, surpised, anger, digust, and fear. How? It will tell by have a picture of a no emotional , than compare to your see what's the diifference ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ce2307a66ade,F1AFDB5CEB25,"Having Facial Action Coding System in the school, would be kinda great ",Position,Adequate,,,
+31057f8543dd,F1AFDB5CEB25,cause it would show the teachers what the student thinks about the assginment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0b1a3401d0d,F1AFDB5CEB25,"Like, the Dr. Huang said ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'. But, the computer needs to understand that most communication is nonverbal, like emotional communication. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d885da449622,F1AFDB5CEB25,"But, than i'm against because how can the computer see what all the student are feeling like? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0093f4496822,F1AFDB5CEB25,"Like, is going to look at every student face, if yes that had be a waste of time cause that would take the whole class period. If no, than do the teachers have to buy a Facial Action Coding System computer for every student. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+39856aa5cc67,F1AFDB5CEB25,"Finally, I think it would be a good idea because the teachers would know how the students are feeling by something they had said or asign. If I was a student, I'd like it cause that would be a good new expreince. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb16a52c39be,F1EEA3FC1490,In the story The Challenge Of Exploring Venus the authour talks about starts and where they all come from and how the earths twin is closets in the planetray neighbor he also talks about the solar system and ow its the secong planet from the sun and earths twin is the closet planted to the earth distance also he talks alot about hoe thivk the earth is and how everything is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets.. the sister of the planet is so inhospitable that the scientits started discussing more visits to the surfacde and astronomers where also fascinated by venus because it may well once have een the most earth like planet in our system in paragraph 5 the authour talks about how the air pressure in the sea level and he talk mainy about how the earths survivable for us humans also he includes things about nasa and how everthing is working for the study of venus such as electronics which is made from silicon carbide which has been tested in paragraph 8 hes talking about the striving challenge presented by venus and how it have value but notg only bbecause of human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2108ff119621,F1EEA3FC1490,this story was about diffrent plantes and how eveything is set up also hoe everything be taveling in the earths eveviorments a ns solar systems. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4974392a3609,F245631F4D97,"The end of the school year has finally come, and you can't wait to be swimming with your friends and family, however , that day will not come. Instead you are assigned your worst fear; a dreadful , hideous , and disgusting summer assignment. When all hope is lost your teacher gives you a final decision. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+90ceaf6ad9d6,F245631F4D97,A teacher-designed project is best for the students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dfbc162f7bf7,F245631F4D97,"the purpose of the teacher is to guide their students on a path of enlightenment through the education system, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bcb941854c0c,F245631F4D97,"students are inherently lazy and will make an easy project, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+711ee5aafbba,F245631F4D97,it provides the teacher a bar for which a teacher can know how advanced their students are before they come to class on the first day. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+06b2604b166e,F245631F4D97,"An educational study at Yale shows that students who go to cram school over the summer have a tendency to achieve a higher score on the SAT compared to those of a self taught student at home. This is without a doubt, proof that a curriculum and or project assigned from a teacher is best to give a student to insure that they retain previous knowledge and can build off of it. With the teacher giving a direct projection and project on what a student needs to know also helps the student, because the student doesn't have to aimlessly ponder on what the teacher wants them to know next year. It allows students to have a narrow and direct line of sight to their goal , and enables to teacher to have a direct overview on the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3cd41483b43d,F245631F4D97,"If a summer project was Student-designed the project, would be of the most basic and rudimentary work a students would want to finish it as fast as possible. As seen in the daily lives of Generic_School students, in which 65% take non honors or AP level courses. We can see a trend that students are not willing to challenge themselves and would not be capable to create a project, in which the project would be academically sufficient for their studies next year. Furthermore it can be shown on a global level in which the United States is ranked within the top 15 but not top 5 based on educational levels. If we as an American culture can't rise up to be a leading power in education with the help of our teachers, how can we expect student-designed projects and studies to do any better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a0874ba280d0,F245631F4D97,"The Generic_School system as had tremendous amount of trouble in which teachers have to ask for multiple planning days. The reasoning for this is due to the fact that students don't knowing the fundamental requirements for a class when they walk into the classroom on the first day. This causes teachers to have to readjust their curriculum in order for the students to catch up to where the teacher wants them to be. A teacher-designed project would allow the teacher to tell the students the basic information they need to know before they come into the class, it also allows to students to prepare their mentality going into the school year. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0645d456a86f,F245631F4D97,"The development of human society as a whole is told by its children and those who can help cultivate the young. Teacher-designed project would provide students a strong foundation for the year to come, it stops students from being lazy and wasting their talents, and helps teachers formulate a more precise teaching curriculum for their students. These examples alone show that summer projects
+
+NEED
+
+to be teacher-designed to insure the betterment of the young generation. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0c668cd90553,F25BA634ADDD,"Would you travel to a dangerous enviorment just to unravel the unknown ? if your answer was ""no"", then you are like most normal people. but, the author of ""The Challenge of exploring Venus"" wouldn't take ""no"" as a answer. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e7ff8f0f7a9c,F25BA634ADDD,"This author believes that the discovery of the true venus , hidden from the naked eye, will benfit the future of science, even with the danger staring them in their face. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ec41df6a83a4,F25BA634ADDD,"The author believes that Venus is special because , it's basically the ""twin"" of earth, which means they might have had life on the surface. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba0d405ac984,F25BA634ADDD,"According to paragraph 4 it states ""Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.""(TCOEV), Which fueled the minds of the scientists , because they just wanna know what was on the surface of venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c014d102934,F25BA634ADDD,"But, with a goal there is also road bumps, one of them is the fact that venus enviorment is crucial. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b69fea132af,F25BA634ADDD,"According to paragraph 3 it states venus has a ""thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus ... temperatures average over 800 degress...liquefy many metals.""(TCOEV), which is extremely dangerous. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+848d59d81f3c,F25BA634ADDD,"But later in the article they stated ""venus have value...expandes to meet very edges of imagination and innovation"" which show that they can gain knowledge in later visits, and advance their technolgy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6b933560e6b,F25BA634ADDD,"The author of 'The Challenge Of Exploring Venus"" explaines why studying Venus is helpful in many ways. Even though you might say ""what if the people get injured or possibly die ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47b0efed0d47,F25BA634ADDD,"he provided details of how there is many diffrent ways they can carry out the mission. So, next time that you are setting a just never give up , even if you come cross a challege. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e187f69c1b5c,F280DC36C974,In this article I would like to have the technology ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7a9c23eabd35,F280DC36C974,"because a computer that can read all 44 major muscles, and also this is where FACS will come in (Facial Action Coding System.) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7652de3020f,F280DC36C974,"It tells how a person it feeling, in my oppain I would want to know the emotions of my friend, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+233fe350a994,F280DC36C974,"I also would racomened this to the school consulers, only so the consuler can help that person with their emotional prabablem. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea10ad294db5,F280DC36C974,"Yes you can see how that person is ""feeling by looking at their face,""
+
+but some people can fake a smile to hide whats going on inside, some people are just scared to let their feeling out because they are worried someone it going to hurt them. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2a6b70fa3063,F280DC36C974,"The ""funny things"" about people is that laughing can be really contagest when you are down in the dirt, and your friend sees that you're just upset, they will do anything to mke you happy they will smile you, make a joke. just to see you smile ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9d837245186,F280DC36C974,But sometimes just looking at someone does not always workout as some people would like ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+79fa60ef252c,F280DC36C974,So this is way I would agree to have the technolgy to see his or hers emotions. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d663cd3a9a86,F296C5CF54D7,There are many resons that people should do that. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4dafc1fd5b4a,F296C5CF54D7,"it would be some much fun to go explor places that you havent been befor, and go see all the unic culters that many people dont ever get to see in their life ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5795c3a83c09,F296C5CF54D7,"you could get closer with some of yor friends and family if they go with you, or invite you to go with them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+725367685ce1,F296C5CF54D7,you could meet new people learn other languiges too ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ef8d01b4d7c,F296C5CF54D7,Also you cold become part of a family they could take you in and youk cold have another really close friend from some were far far away from were you live. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7dff02aa0d50,F296C5CF54D7,"In the story Luke said""It would a chance of a life time."" An I think it would be a chance of a life time ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+10952a266343,F296C5CF54D7,In my opinone I would do it. I would love to go on a trip tio eventure around the world. I love learning new cultres and to see what what it could help me with in my life. Also that it would be cool to do a report on all the places that you whent to in the proses. If I were him or any one els that got the opertunity I would say yes to doing it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+12c0c672afcd,F296C5CF54D7,People that want to explor should do this in order to see what ist like and if thay want to do this for the a long time or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb92dd0e1cc3,F296C5CF54D7,"Just one time at a different place then were you live is awesome because you never want to leave. You could also go see uther animal sthat you have never seen befor in a zoo or that you have never herd of too. I love to see knew thing even if I have heard of it,or not, or seen it, or not it is still really cool to experiance that. An I think kids, aldolts, teens, or eve the elderl would stil love to see that or experiance that time with the family. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65899d1ef682,F296C5CF54D7,"And that is my reso to do tha or a least tr yit out for the first time. It could only come once in a lfe time dont let it go to wast, because if you did than you made the biggest mustake of your life. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e1fa1085729,F2A3BE5019F0,The face is not created by aliens and here are a few reasons why. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a172b4a402f5,F2A3BE5019F0,It was a mesa ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e724a49fc67,F2A3BE5019F0,maybe even a shadow ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d1e0cdc7495,F2A3BE5019F0,"First, A mesa, a mesa is a very common landform found around the American West ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+afaf8c8c1924,F2A3BE5019F0,"Even so there is one in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, USA. Which is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on mars. If something on the earth can have a mesa about or the same height had the face on mars it is very likely that it was a mesa. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+214ef67d1899,F2A3BE5019F0,"Secondly, shadows We all knows that shadows can be very deceiving just like in this instance ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81aafc967519,F2A3BE5019F0,"A shadow could have been reflecting off the viking 1 while it was taking this photo of the ""Face"", or maybe the shadows were from a bigger land form. that was infront, behind, or on the sides casting a shadow onto this mesa. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1051770a549,F2A3BE5019F0,"All in all, From these facts you can conclude that this was a natural landform and not some type of alien thing. If you still do not believe that it was natural. Another spaceship went into space and found the ""Face"" and took a very detailed picture and there were no markings or signs of aliens.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+556fcbb7825f,F2A79A33B020,"Contrary to popular belief, there is nothing unatural about the supposed ""Face on Mars"". Though many would like to believe in the supernatural, this oddity is nothing but a rock formation. There are several reasons as to why the theory of aliens making this formation is preposterous, each reason stronger than the previous. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5e6678ac17fc,F2A79A33B020,"First and foremost, if these photos of the alleged face were the work of possible Martians, NASA would have found further evidence by now. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7334a5ed29d1,F2A79A33B020,"Even if the cameras used to take these pictures weren't of the highest quality, said cameras would have been able to at least catch some photos of further signs of life. Things such as houses or buildings, for example. Now, if some one would like to argue that the aliens lived in caves or other natural formations of the sort, how would those people like to argue the fact that there are no visible creatures in any photos? Do they expect people to believe that every living thing on Mars decided to hide from a satelite they would not even be able to see from the surface? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+73b84686bcac,F2A79A33B020,"Additionally, even if NASA had found this further evidence, why would the company try to hide it? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d04d19a0ed1,F2A79A33B020,"Not only would releasing such infrormation to the public leave NASA with all sorts of world renouned achievements, it would be more than beneficial for the company's financial standpoint. Releasing statements as big as signs of life on Mars would do wonders for the company. The more achievements, the more sponsors will see the potential in investing money in a program such as NASA. Adding to that, the more sponsors, the more projects NASA can fund, and by extension, the more the foundation will be able to learn and teach the public. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+81288fe601fd,F2A79A33B020,"Probably the most obvious piece of evidence that busts the idea of unknown life, is that these photos were taken in 1976 (according to paragraph 5 of Unmasking the Face on Mars) . Technology at that time was still fairly primitive, especially for space travel. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8e47955f2bbc,F2A79A33B020,"The photo just happened to be taken at the right time, at the right angle, by a pilgrim piece of technology. Further pictures, such as the ones taken in 2001, reveal that the ""face"" is just a mesa, with next to no details that resemble that of a human complextion. Think of it as the
+
+""...Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho..."" (paragraph 12) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c03a7f7792fa,F2A79A33B020,"this ""face"" on Mars is no different from other conspiracies. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+716266000b1f,F2A79A33B020,"Things like the picture of the Loch Ness Moster, the famous photo that was confirmed to be faked. Another good example is the ""Bigfoot"" craze. Both cases are similar to this one because all are just photos that are hard to be certain about, that sparked international interest. Not only are they similar that way, but each one has been debunked with solid evidence. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0a51fff7539,F2A79A33B020,"The face on Mars is simply a clump of rock, nothing to be even slightly concerned about. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d04c7952928f,F2AE26666823,The challenges of exploring Venus can be worthly pursuit but dangers can be presented. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6742a93e09de,F2AE26666823,"One postive example of
+
+Venus is called the evening star is one the brightest ponits of light in the night sky making it simple for even an amater stragazer to spot ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2df86fcf8e10,F2AE26666823,The reason we explore or visit other plants its because the human curioity will likely lead us to many other discovers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97bc35250b08,F2AE26666823,A not so postive example is just imagine living on Venus and not having electronics lets put an eample just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e884e5eab7b3,F2AE26666823,Second Venus is called the earth twins. why do you ask? Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closet in distance too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7bb04f20d002,F2AE26666823,"Earth and Venus and Mars are other planetary neighbor who they orbit the sun at different speeds.
+
+The difference in speed from earth to venus is that sometimes we are closer to mars and other times to venus is close to earth ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d1cdbb31088,F2AE26666823,A negavtive reason Venus has a thick atomosphere of almost 97 perecent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Another challange is that that the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atomshere ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10891fd55c5f,F2AE26666823,The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4591ba6bf1d4,F2AE26666823,A reason why humanity is exploring venus because it once have been earth like planet in our planet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d23ccfb96d3a,F2AE26666823,A long time ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3752b1d4a34d,F2AE26666823,This shows the dangers Venus has and the if it worthly to discovered ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aceb7a7acec1,F2B86853339B,Growing up in the more modern times I see many things that would seem almost impossible to someone not born in this time. Cars are becoming more advanced than ever. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5313c4d14355,F2B86853339B,"Although they have their advantages, the use of cars also has many disadvantages. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8cfde4ea838e,F2B86853339B,They polute the air and they can be very dangerous. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc398a2d9c4d,F2B86853339B,"The pros of cars are by far outweighed by the cons, if you look at them in the long run. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7598ca8a3271,F2B86853339B,Limiting car use could preserve the earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+589c5ba58193,F2B86853339B,"relieve stress, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a298b518edce,F2B86853339B,"and reduce the amount of overweight people in America . 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6809db3c2b37,F2B86853339B,"Although cars make everyday life easier, lessening the use of them could potentially ""save the world."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b55e77e8798f,F2B86853339B,"Polution is at an all time high and car emissions are largely to blame. In paragraph five it states that, ""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Euope... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States."" This is saying that the emissions from cars are destroying the earth. Though going to the grocery store that is two miles away may seem easier by just hoping in the car and arriving in less than five minutes, walking or biking would be better for you and the environment. Many cities are even focusing on becoming more ""pedestrian friendly"" to help boost the enthusiasm of cutting the use of cars. Walking is not the only option either, using hybrid cars, carpooling, or public transportation is also an option. Though still involving the use of cars, emissions would be reduced greatly. Also, emissions can cause sickness. In large cities where cars are depended on there is Smog. Smog is a thick black cloud of pollution that hangs in the air over large ciies. Smog can make you very sick if you injest it. Many people in cities that do have smog have to wear face masks when walking outside. I do not think that face masks are a new trend that everyone would like to start wearing. Lessening the use of cars around us would be a healthy step towards restoring our environment and could start a trend for others to do so aswell. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0756a29287cc,F2B86853339B,Another advantage of cutting the use of cars would be less accidents ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f667209e1a2d,F2B86853339B,"Thousands of car related accidents happen every minute around the world in automobiles. If everyone started walking, biking, or using pubilc transportation less cars would be on the road leading to less accidents. Families lose loved ones everyday just because the driver of the car isnt paying attention ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d054c54148a4,F2B86853339B,"Drivers have many extra responisbilities when opperating the vehicle. They have to watch everything around them, including being responsible for everyone else in the car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fcbfa8a317c9,F2B86853339B,"Many people have reported being ""less stressed"" after they lowered the use of cars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e59c34aff2f9,F2B86853339B,"Heidrun Walter said ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"" when talking about moving to a car free community. Thousands are converting to the trend of using the car less and others are cutting the use completely! Following this trend would be a large benefit to yourself and the enviornment around you. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc70e417d6a4,F2B86853339B,"Lastly, America is known for being obese and cars support this idea. Cars make it easy for someone to get places without putting any physical work into it. Cars encourage people to be lazy ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5bc0f1139153,F2B86853339B,Lowering the use of cars and walking more would help reduce the percent of people that are overweight in our country ,Claim,Effective,,,
+81ba68292123,F2B86853339B,"Instead of wanting to get in the car and drive to do something they could walk and get some excercise or even take a bike if they wanted to get there faster. Walking and biking are low intensity excercises making it easy for everyone to participate. Many overweight people always feel lathargic, getting out and walking or biking would also help them to feel better. Doing this would help our people and environtment become more heatlhy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d327d73dc47d,F2B86853339B,"Cars are a great invention but it is not necessary for every individual to have one. Walking and biking are better alternatives. The use of cars has gone through the roof creating problems around the world. A healthy environment for our children and grandchildren is what we imagine. One does not think of using a car as damaging to the enviornment until after they have done it. Limiting car usage would turn the world into a healthier, stress reduced place. For these reasons I think it would be of best interest to try and find other alternatives to driving as much.            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7cfa01663f36,F2C57EEEF02C,"Education is critical at any age, but especially to those who remain still in grade school. Taking time off such as summer break, poses issues for teaches to make sure their students are still growing their knowledge on this time off. Many school have begun to introduce summer assignments to their students as an attempt to decrease this time that is spent not completely focused on school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c9e02b074169,F2C57EEEF02C,"Although many believe that these projects should be driven by the teacher, students should be the one to design these projects ",Position,Effective,,,
+fb2c96b531bc,F2C57EEEF02C,it sparks creativity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ffb63f1f4970,F2C57EEEF02C,motivation ,Claim,Effective,,,
+86322e6e791d,F2C57EEEF02C,a greater understanding of the topic. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+999bdda991aa,F2C57EEEF02C,"By giving students the opportunity to design their own projects, they get the chance to display their creativity. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f7ed71aa6d03,F2C57EEEF02C,"This topic of creativity is important because it is what separates peers from each other so that not one person is the same. Each student has their own style that is different from those around which is what makes them unique. When student driven projects are created, it forces those who complete the project to think outside of the box. This is significant because it is what grows the knowledge of each student; by doing this they are learning the new material as the project is being completed. By implementing these sort of projects the students creativity is apparent because teachers are not giving the student the task; rather the student is the one designing and completing the assignment all on their own. Creativity is an essential piece to the puzzle of learning for children and by creating student-designed projects, each child will benefit across the board. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+11fe7e3f8e20,F2C57EEEF02C,"When projects are given by teachers, especially over the summer, students are not motivated to complete the task. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e8f080b5941f,F2C57EEEF02C,"Over summer break, many students just want to be able to relax and not do work that they may have little interest in that has been assigned by their teacher. By having student-driven projects, it gives students an opportunity to create something that they are passionate about. This is important because when a student is passionate about what they are working on, it creates motivation for them to complete the assignment. A student is highly likely to complete an assignment that they are involved in because it is relative to their life. Many projects that are handed around by teachers have little to no relevance to the lives of students. If students get the opportunity to create their own assignment, they will feel a sense of pride because they are passionate about the topic. This leads to greater motivation internally for any student which leads to better overall results. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c6a8ff82de96,F2C57EEEF02C,"Material that has been researched by the student and completed on their own has been proven to show greater results in the grade attached to the project. When an assignment has been handed to a student to complete that has been created by someone else, they are likely only to do the minimum of what has been assigned. By doing this they are not able to gain full knowledge of the topic and fully understand what is going on ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c9553652ccfb,F2C57EEEF02C,"On the flip side, when a student has to design a project on their own and research the material, they gain a greater understanding of the task at hand. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8bfbb6e8009c,F2C57EEEF02C,"By having little to no teacher involvement, it forces students to have to learn the material all on their own which has been proven that the student retains the information longer. This does not just help students for this topic, but helps them in life as well because if they are able to learn on their own they will be able to hold all of this information instead of just retaining it for one assignment and then being done with it after. In the end, student-driven projects causes students to better understand the material for not only one project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5e9088bd999a,F2C57EEEF02C,Although some may say that teachers should be the ones to design summer projects for their students ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+75328742e8db,F2C57EEEF02C,it is not in the students best interest for this to take place. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9fc703086b70,F2C57EEEF02C,"By creating student driven projects, many students get the opportunity to show off what they can do without being confined into the same box as their peers. For them, it is a way to stand out among those students around them. When the student can create something that they are passionate about, they will want to complete it to the best of their ability. But, since they are learning this material on their own, they are more likely to have a strong foundation on the topic which is only something that is beneficial to them in the end. By schools implementing student-designed summer projects, their students will be better off in the end.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+183c52966714,F2D723344069,"By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips, the most of any Seagoing Cowboy,"" and "" It toook two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+896739de6d72,F2D723344069,"Who would ever want to take that long overseas. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9464bd9cfd3a,F2D723344069,""" Caring for animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be cleaned"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efc70a173c9b,F2D723344069,"I wouldn't want to work that hard overseas either. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+25d9d1d42ee7,F2D723344069,"On his second trip, Luke served as night watchman. His job was to check on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captain, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. But he couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+677b07cda924,F2D723344069,Who would ever want to go through that and get broken ribs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bdad2ef97d7,F2D723344069,That is my argument to not be a Seagoing Cowboy.    ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+001a03dec4e8,F2D89425BF9C,This stroy is talking abour a planet name Venus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+275dfb6f5016,F2D89425BF9C,"Thier saying that Venus is the Brightest in the evening. Venus is the secound plaent form the sun. Sicencetest are saying that Venus is like Earth's tiwn?.Earth and Venus have the same terms of density and size and occasionally Fomr the closest in distance too.
+
+NASA is wroking on approaching and study Venus. Tos see what dose it have in the air or dose it have and disaes. The aother projects is looking back to an old technology called the mechanical Computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an inprtan role in the 1940s during World War ||.They are going to meet challenges oresented by venus has value and its not only because of the insight by gaind on the plaent itself. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f329ef7731b2,F2D89425BF9C,On Earths travels and beyound should not be Be limited by dangers travels abd doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of the imantion. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6d3008ec7d83,F2FA6B69F481,I think people should and shouldn't use their phones while driving. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a1f67cb7beb1,F2FA6B69F481,"I think people who drive and pay more attention to their phones should be arrested and have their lisecen taken away because the could cause crashes , deaths and traffic ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7238f7c86723,F2FA6B69F481,the most common death in America is car crashes because of stupid drivers and people looking at their phone while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+986947147f01,F2FA6B69F481,Now the reason I say people should have their phones is in case of emergency like if they get in a car crash or if they have to call 911 to help someone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6e37d65e3ee,F2FA6B69F481,in the u. s. it is a law that you have to have your phone down from your hands while driving or at least have a Bluetooth device that can connect to your phone to your car so you don't have to look at your phone to call or answer a call while your driving a car ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+621a8034380d,F2FA6B69F481,so I'm both with and against with this argument about if drivers should and shouldn't have their phones while driving    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6c0977457853,F324DBEBCAFA,In this article they share about the Facial Acting Coding System. They ask us if we agree with it or not. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+dfc29d37de54,F324DBEBCAFA,"My answer would be yes, I think there is nothing wrong with it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2b1e9b520090,F324DBEBCAFA,My personal opinon is it is actually kind of cool. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+390efc8a8298,F324DBEBCAFA,This can really help people out knowing others emotions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd638fe28733,F324DBEBCAFA,The reason I think there isn't anything wrong with this is because I dont see its harming anything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b7551b6d111,F324DBEBCAFA,When I said it could help people I was refering to when they said that it can show when someone is bored and that the teacher could try to make it less boring. If I was a teacher or I wondered hiow someone is I9 would want to use this. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7845789c074b,F324DBEBCAFA,Another reason this is helpful is that it can detect when someone is feeling down or mad or something else. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b0f1411cc93,F324DBEBCAFA,When someone sees what it detected they can see if the student needs someone to talk to or help. When a teacher uses this and they see that the student is bored and not focus they could try to make it fun or do something at the moment and make the focus and awake. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e7eb560d8fa,F324DBEBCAFA,This system can be compareded to peoples thoughts on what some are feeling. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2cc7d3067f20,F324DBEBCAFA,There are some people that can almost do the same as this. But this system can do it pretty fast and tell yus exactly everything. They say when you do this you move your muscles and whatever ones you usae can make you happy. Which I think is cool and smart. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+78683972ffc4,F324DBEBCAFA,In conclusion I totally agree with this. Almost everything I put is my feeling on this Facial Action Coding System. Overall I can say it can really help some people out and that it is very smart. This is a thing they could use in an everyday thing. It could aso correct how people feel about teachers lessons or just anything like that. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+02e0e38d979b,F34BB022A303,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy but also dangerous. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+40033aeafd61,F34BB022A303,The idea of studying Venus is a very scary idea because of all the dangers it can cuase for humans to get close to the very hot and stormy planet. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e22117642fea,F34BB022A303,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" they are wanting to explore Venus but they realized the dangers it can have and the worthiness of also trying this experiment. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf15a3f8bfc2,F34BB022A303,"In the text the author states that Venus is a very hard place to land a spacecraft on thats why we haven't done it in 3 decades. A reason for them not landing a spacecraft on Venus is the extreme temperatures that humans can face. The temperatures o Venus can get up to over 800 degrees fahrenheit, also the atmosphric pressure is 90 times greater than wht we experience on Earth. The author states that a ""submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals."" The author is saying that if went to Venus with a spacecraft there would be a great possibility that the spacecraft could melt right then and there on Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d6d3c86f03a,F34BB022A303,"In the article ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author gaves us many reasons why the experiment would be a worthy but also very risky experiment. Knowing what the people from NASA said about Venus's temperatures and atmosphere would be very risky for the humand they would take to that planet. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c87141e031f2,F34DD475F104,"Have you ever wanted to help somebody? Everybody should help someone when they are in need. You should always help someone even if you dont know them. Sometimes you should just do thinks to be nice and not for money. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a825bc37f642,F34DD475F104,You also get to visit other places and see unusual things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47b46aeba402,F34DD475F104,One of the dangers of going on a cattle boat though is being out in the middle of the sea so you always have to watch your back and becareful what you do. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+78426baff5e5,F34DD475F104,One of the good things about going on a cattle boat is when you do go on one you might learn somethings about animals. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4673d1b5ef7,F34DD475F104,Another thing is that you get to help people in need. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac2f9c88bc06,F34DD475F104,Another good thing is that you might make a new friend in another country. You also might go back to that country for a trip with your family. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9a46f8fca8e,F34DD475F104,Its nice when your friends ask you to do something like going to another country and helping people out. When you go and help people like Luke did just think about those people and how they felt about you helping them with getting food and water. After your done helping someone in need like Luke did it kinda makes you feel happy that you did that for that person. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a874cc17d40,F34DD475F104,"Plus if you were to go on a cattle boat its not all just work you can also have a little fun playing tennis, boxing, fencing, Table tennis,and whittling and reading. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c89925896d5e,F34DD475F104,Thats why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.  ,Position,Adequate,,,
+06a5c4396175,F3580A6BAFA8,"Almost everyone owns a car because people are traveling constantly to get from point A to point B. No matter who it may be, that person at some point in their lives needs some way to get around. Everyday people need to either go to the store, pick up their kids, go to work, go to school, you name it. That doesn't mean that owning a car is a necessity, all around the world many people are trying to cut down and limit their car usage by having a whole lot of other options. There are buses, people can car pool, walk, skate, bike, and many more ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6b32e9553db0,F3580A6BAFA8,"People are coming to the conclusion that if we, as a whole, decide to start cutting down on our usage of cars it can benefit the way we live. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+9701cdb33e8e,F3580A6BAFA8,"Lots of people actually don't mind not having a car just yet. Most teenagers do want to get their license and a car but there's so much other things they need to focus on. It really is not a priority for them because they have school, work, plus if they do need to get somewhere they can always take the bus and get a ride from a friend (Source 4). In Germany, there is a city by the name of Vauban, that is known to be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life (Source 1). Vauban's goal and idea, which is to cut down on cars for a better living, has made it'a way around the world, so that other states and countries can aspire to do the same and little by little we could have a world that is not so dependent on cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc0881c9cc7b,F3580A6BAFA8,"The idea of using cars, for some, it causes them stress ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa0bfae9b4cd,F3580A6BAFA8,"they're always tense, not using a car makes them happier, as stated by Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two (Source 1). The stress aspect of this could be due to the fact that in the most recent years, the percentage of car crashes and accidents have gone up. Many people abhor the idea of using cars because they have been in an terible accident themselves or someone close to them. Also, it can even just be all the traffic jams that occur during rush hour, which makes people late and accidents do happen. For example in Bogota, Colombia, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to their designated location, to leave the streets due to traffic jams (Source 3). Since they knew that lots of their citizens were deciding not to use cars they started making uneven, pitted sidewalks into nice, smooth, replaced ones for them (Source 3). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f0a325d18aee,F3580A6BAFA8,Another reason why people want to limit their usage on cars is because of all the pollution cars create. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e07a277e7c35,F3580A6BAFA8,"Passenger cars are rsponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States (Source 1). Not many people think about the effects of air pollution like smog, but it is a big deal. Since people don't think about it often, there is no way for the majority of us to try and find a solution to put into action to stop it or help it go down. In Paris, there was a partial driving ban to clear the air around the city (Source 2). Paris' partial ban was their idea to try and make their city a better place. With the ban being enforced and put into play there  were about 4,000 drivers fined (Source 2). It turns out that since the driving ban was made the congestion, car traffic, had gone down 60 percent in the capital of France, just after five days of less smog pollution and Paris is typically known to have more smog than any other European capitals (Source 2). This goes to show, that slowly people are actually becoming aware of what's going on and they actually care enought to try and make things better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c8d7756d1ae5,F3580A6BAFA8,"All in all, there are many ways to try and cut down on our car usage for the better. It can be anything from not buying as many cars, to deciding to not use cars at all and deciding to walk, skate, and bike, etc. Not only will limiting our car usage as a whole stop traffic jams, car accidents, air pollution, and more, it will help to benefit our lives for the better whether or not people want to believe it. If things keep going from here, and more and more decide that less car usage is better than over a time span of let's say 20-30 years, there could be a lot less dangerous things occuring in our lives.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e624e338577b,F36E4C217F66,"Venus is an second planet for the sun. Sometime Venus is called the ""Evening
+
+Star,"" because Venus is one of the brightest points on light in the night sky. Venus also have a nickname like other planets have different nicknames. Venus nickname is misleading.
+
+-
+
+Earth, Venus, and Mars are our other planetary neighbor, they orbit in a different speeds. there is a time when Mars is getting closer to our planet Earth and there is a time when Venus is getting closer to the Earth.
+
+Often Venus referred to as Earth's twin because Venus is the closest planet to
+
+Earth in a size and occasionlly the closest in distance.
+
+-
+
+Like other planets have atmosphere and different temperture, Venus also have atmospere and differents temperture. When a spaceship when to Venus it couldn't survived the landing for more than a few hours because unlike Venus's surface is hottest in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our sun.
+
+A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.
+
+Venus's clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in it atmosphere. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1288ef0ec580,F36E4C217F66,Venus may be dangerous but sometime it can be our nearest option for a planetary visit. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+9137ca20efaf,F36E4C217F66,"Long ago, Venus was like our planet Earth because back then it has trees and same atmosphere as Earth. But now Venus is dry up and only a dry vellays where water used to flow a montains left.   ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+387f47ba4397,F3928951775C,"Many people throughout the world, would agree that car usage plays a significant role in daily lives. Although some may argue it plays an important role or a not so important role, the limitation of car usuage would be a very helpful thing for everyone, and the world we are surrounded by. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4e66a5dbfb0c,F3928951775C,There are many advantages to cities being able to control the amount of cars being used everyday. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d27bb78a399b,F3928951775C,"Advantages such as, less pollution in the enviroment by creating less smog, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ac018c8a9b57,F3928951775C,"making the cities and roads a lot safer, by lowering the risk of getting into or even causing a wreck, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+668d9c23dc45,F3928951775C,"even something as simple as making your life, and the lives around you much more peaceful. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+78a5658368b0,F3928951775C,"""Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. (paragraph 5)"" Cars are the number one cause of pollution in most cities, espcially ones that have large amounts of drivers on the road in a single day. The author of source one, states in pargraph 8 that ""..some new suburbs may well look more Vauban-like not only in developed countries, but also in the developing world, where emissons from an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities""  All authors state that limiting car usage, is a great way to reduce air pollution. Paragraph 10, of source two, states that ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+816c4763d613,F3928951775C,"If car usuage was limited in cities there would be less smog, and pollution in the air. Not only would it be better for the enviroment, it would also be better for your health. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+17a0f1492995,F3928951775C,"Wrecks are things that claim the lives of people each and everyday. Some can be prevented, yet not all can. Think of how many lives are taken each day, due to wrecks because of things like congestion in big cities. Or even things such as someone behind the wheel who is stressed, and driving wrecklessly. A source from paragraph 3, states ""When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way"" Many people, get tense and stressed from the drivers around them. Limiting how much you use a car, can improve things such as stress levels. Imagine how much more at ease you would be if you constantly heard, a bicylest wizzing by you, or hearing children chattering and laughing among themselves, instead of hearing horns honking, loud motors, or even the sound of a car crash.
+
+Roads and streets take up much more space than we think or even realize. With less cars on the road everyday and more people walking, or riding a bike, could only mean one thing; less roads and bigger sidewalks. More cities are trying to make limiting car usage a much bigger thing, ""...in attempts to make suburbs more compact..."" Source one, also states that ""In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather that in malls along some distant highway. (paragraph 6) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b109d1343706,F3928951775C,"Getting to these places will become safer for everyone. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0eda976662bb,F3928951775C,"As you can see, there are many advantages to limiting car usage, such as, limiting the amount of pollution there is, lowering the risks of getting into, or even causing a wreck, and even something as simple as making it a more peaceful enviroment to live in, not only for yourself, but for others around you. Our world, and daily lives would be affected in great ways, in more cities, and even more countries, participated in lessing the amount of car usage.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7d3b6961fd16,F3A980C4613A,Have you ever seen something unusual in the ground? If so do you think it was created by humans or just a natural landform of some sort. Many people believe that most landforms on earth are made by humans ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5494bc3dd72c,F3A980C4613A,The face on mars is a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3768063bd559,F3A980C4613A,"If the ""face' on mars was created by alliens it would look a lot different. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7d2f9607a751,F3A980C4613A,"Many people think alliens look weird, Well the ""face"" on mars wastn't so weird looking. It looked almost like a human face. You would think that alliens would make something radical and not just a face in their planet. Many people seem to believe that they would make something simple. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4fa38e13fe5f,F3A980C4613A,"Eventhough many people were not satisfied with the theory that NASA gave them, NASA went on to search for more clues as to which ""alliens made the landform."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c36df6335aa,F3A980C4613A,From the pictures that they took you would think that they would be able to detect whether alliens even walked/ touched the surface of the landform. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c06888d3bdad,F3A980C4613A,"If you think that alliens made the landform, I would suggest you look at the picture more closely. Just because its on a planet like mars doesnt mean it was made by an allien. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+02fd9d1cc628,F3A980C4613A,I mean how many people actually believe in alliens anyway? If you've never seen them how do you know if they even exist? Take another quick look at the picture tell what you think. Is it even possible for alliens to be alive even if it is on another planet? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+03d41232df66,F3A980C4613A,"The ""face"" on mars is a natural landform. What leads me to beieve that, is that i dont think alliens are real. Maybe they are real, but why would they make something so simple as a face. Dont you think they wouldve went a little overboard with their creations? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aa1b4b9353fd,F3E8A109AE05,I believe that the use of techonology to read student emotional expression is valuable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9723a52ba7dd,F3E8A109AE05,It be awesome to read somebody's emotions thorugh a machine. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e023632a464e,F3E8A109AE05,it would tell you alot about what a person is feeling and thats important to know. their are many excellent and well reasoned examples of why this technology is valuable. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+212d859b463c,F3E8A109AE05,My one reason i believe this is valuable technology is if somebody was feeling depressed and was not willing to open up to anybody that individual could do self harm to himself ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2a3111dafb3,F3E8A109AE05,"If they know how that individual was feeling maybe they would have helped he/she. in the passage it says "" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused and bored"". Then Dr. Huang says"" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. This technology could become really usful for many different situations. Thats one of the reasons of why this makes this machine so valuable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d830416ecbe,F3E8A109AE05,"The creator of FACS[ [Facial Action Coding System] Dr. Paul Eckman has ""classified six basic emotions"". The machine can read happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. this type of technology can aid and solve world wide problem. For example what if an individual person or more were having issues with a certain subject at school but dont know how to ask for help ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b96fefeaf115,F3E8A109AE05,"The Computer would make "" 3-D computer model of the face"" and they can anaylze what they might be feeling about the subject. then thats when the help comes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+91934cd45075,F3E8A109AE05,Another example is reading different emotions is some how very important. It can be used against people who have commited crime. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5377ddc63b3f,F3E8A109AE05,"An example is if a person who murdered somebody and nobody knew if he was being honest or not, the machine can read his emotions and has a better chance to tell if the person is lying or not. It can be used for celebritys and politician as said in the article. This can identify many human being feelings and it doesnt take to much time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15e66f14f4cc,F3E8A109AE05,In conclusion their are still many reasons why i believe this technology is valuable. This type of technology would be nice to have around and would be really usful. It would prevent many accidents and help solve probelms. Techonology like this cant go to waste and should be used to our adavntage. this is my reason why i think this technology is valuable.                 ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d7eb4685c150,F42FF5B7D208,"Teachers have more often than not been the epicenter of academic negativity. There always has been and always will complain about teaching styles. If students could take the steering wheel, chances are they will understand the material taught and retain that information. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+04f561e39da6,F42FF5B7D208,summer projects should be student designed rather than teacher designed ,Position,Effective,,,
+55544d564401,F42FF5B7D208,"it allows for a more positve and creative atmosphere, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f637e7e07c34,F42FF5B7D208,improved scheduling ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d4071eafcda7,F42FF5B7D208,"higher pass rates. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa822ece9a94,F42FF5B7D208,Virtually nobody wants to spend their summer doing classwork and projects. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9c0347c212da,F42FF5B7D208,"However, if the projects were both educational and entertaining, then summer would be that much more enjoyable. It would also allow the content to soak in much better. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+afcef43e886b,F42FF5B7D208,"For instance, say a student wanted to to a project on auto mechanics. With a teacher designed rubric, the would want the project to be somewhat generc in its presentation. On the flip side of that, if the rubric was composed by students, that student now has a variety of options as far as presentation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7008101b9f48,F42FF5B7D208,"intstead of having to worry about one big poject, student could decide to break the project up into shorter, more managable dates. It would also allow for a more balanced schedule in general. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f4a0a6b9799,F42FF5B7D208,"Some people say that if the old rubric works, then keep on using it. They have been working for years now, so why change it; because students are sick and tired of repititon. Doing the same thing over and over for an extended amount of time is not good. It starts to blur the summers together, to the point where someone will not remember what they did because of the summers being so similar. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89ac6ac031c9,F42FF5B7D208,"With that being said, student designed projects are the much better route. With students being able to choose the subject and presentation style of the project, it will allow for creative juices to flow through everyones' minds and really intrigue the students. It would also allow for better time management on the development of said project. Finally, if students are interested in their projects and they genuinely want to do it, then the grades will improve. They will also be able to gather and retain the information that is being introduced to them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+69d112a8111f,F43B82E81D75,"Teacher-based or student-based summer project, which is better? Some schools require students to keep their mind thinking even during summer break. They use summer projects to help their mind stay awake. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f8abc2aae046,F43B82E81D75,students completing the project would rather make it themselves than have a teacher assign the project to them. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b917ece1784b,F43B82E81D75,"they will make it more fun and interesting for themselves, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+42de094708c5,F43B82E81D75,"they will make the project easier for them to understand, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c962e25966ec,F43B82E81D75,they will enjoy doing the project since it will be from their prospective. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b73fa8c85069,F43B82E81D75,"Although a student-based project would be more enjoyable for them to complete, a teacher based project would be more effective for both the teacher and the student. The teacher would make the project how it's supposed to be because they know what the students are supposed to learn over the summer. Having the students make their own project would make it to easy for them and the teacher would not really know what is going on because the kids are not going to school. Teachers would want the students to know the proper materials for the next school year even if it mean't just writing a summary of a book. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db065f298d79,F43B82E81D75,"The summer project should be a teacher-based project because it informs the teacher of what is happening and what they are doing during the project, it helps the student learn what they need to maintain in their brain during the summer, and it also makes sure the project is not to easy or hard for the students. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4b94da0d00da,F43B82E81D75,"The student would not want to spend their summer doing a boring project because that would mean that they would put it off until the end of summer or they might just not do it at all. Having a project that makes them go outside and explore the world is very interesting and would make anyone want to do it. Students need motivation and having the project be something fun like go to an amusement park and explain what your see. If a teacher really wants a student to spend their summer doing a project, there has to be a motivation factor or something that makes them want to complete the project. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e55e85ad98d6,F43B82E81D75,Student could work in groups to make it easier. It would not necessarily be the whole project being easier it would just be making short cuts to get to one point faster. The groups would be people who are already friends and that would motivate them to do the project because then while doing work they still hang out with their friends. Making the project easier might also mean that the students might be able to understand it better and if they do need help the can ask their peers or email the teacher. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+4a6af9318a19,F43B82E81D75,What older teachers think young students like might not always be what they like. Students like to explore and be who they want to be but teachers might make a stay at home project. Teenagers and students are also very impatient they do not like to do activities for a long time. This project should have a two week period to complete then the students will complete it faster and will make them more prepared for the next school year. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d110b04244f9,F43B82E81D75,This all makes the students and teachers life easier. Summer is mean't to be spent away from school so having to complete a project is more then enough fro the students. If the student has a problem which their project they can just ask their peers or they can ask the teacher. It should not be very difficult for the student and schools should only make this a mandatory projects but not make it take up all of the students summer. Neither do teachers want to be grading a bunch of projects at the beginning of the school year when everything just started again. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2374a547e375,F456754DA472,The face on Mars is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cc5f748b6da3,F456754DA472,The reason why I am convinced that it is a natural ladform is because the Viking 2 saw a shadowy likeness of a human face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b8784ddcc5e,F456754DA472,They saw an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end that seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c5886d0899a,F456754DA472,Another reason why you should believe that the face on Mars is real is because the Jet Propulsion Lab saw the face on their motor ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+530cf15ef957,F456754DA472,"The said it looked like an Egyptian Pharoah. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e6de7894310,F456754DA472,NASA unveiled the image for people to see. The people were fascinated ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e6f93ae6a672,F456754DA472,That's when they really thought it was a natural landform. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6e8d569b72b,F456754DA472,"The ""Face on Mars"" has become popular. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+55428026dc0e,F456754DA472,"It is now in films, magazines, books, talk shows, and haunted grocery stores. The face on Mars is a natural landform. Many people have experienced the face that appears on the planet of Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f67483589006,F456754DA472,"In conclusion, the story about the face on Mars being a natural landform is true. The face was created on it's own. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fc6306a621fc,F486B5722EEB,"Relaxing and warm, the summer approaches after a year of trecherous hard work and learning. But that needed break is interupted by a project that is due at the end of the summer. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+73f17ea5cd92,F486B5722EEB,Over the summer projects should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e48c69e01003,F486B5722EEB,"to allow creativity, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5be8a060c413,F486B5722EEB,inclusivity ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eef693644e38,F486B5722EEB,and give students opportunity to learn about a topic they are passionate about. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+028097e26900,F486B5722EEB,"During the school year all projects have rubrics, exact instructions and little time to add personal creative touches, but with elongated time and less strict boundries students will be able to tap into their inner creativity and manifest a project that is new and interesting for anyone that views it ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9802492b2f0d,F486B5722EEB,Over the summer students are at home and do not have the resources avaliable that are typically exposed to in a school. Without these resources students might not be able to create a project that is teacher designed ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61786f7df524,F486B5722EEB,"A student designed project, however, would allow students to use their surronding to create a project unique to them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+834a519869a1,F486B5722EEB,It may seem like a student designed project could be less neat and careless but if the student is passionate about their topic then they will be interested in designing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+025f5c0f027e,F486B5722EEB,"It will also be important to them, so they will work hard to make it the best they can. My favorite class is psychology and whenever I have a project in that class I want to spend extra time on it and make sure it is good because the topic is important to me. A student designed project is also benefical because students are only outside of school for the summer and on short breaks, so why not utlize this new freedom of being out of school to allow students to design their own project they are passionate about. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+766180dde6d8,F486B5722EEB,If they are passionate about the topic the project will seem less like a burden and more like an opportuntity to make learning fun. If the project is student designed and they are really passionate about it they may decide to continue the project even after it is done. This could end up benefitting the community by supplying a learning tool or by helping a group of people in need. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d73bd5e589b2,F486B5722EEB,"Allowing over the summer projects to be student designed will allow students to be creative, inclusive to all student environments and strengths and provide an opportuity for students to explore on of their passions in depth. All of these things are benefical to the student and should be encouraged, so that students can grow and learn outside of school as well as during the school year. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+055f23260509,F494E7D49939,"Earth is the only plant that humans can stand ,talk,walk and breath on by your self with no help . haves 800 degree farenheit when lading from space while the perssure will be 90 times greater with the atmopheric ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3adc0bf940dd,F494E7D49939,some peoole want to know is other plants save to vist . ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0b473840c4cb,F494E7D49939,"Mars ,Venus are the close to earth neigboor from speed of time mars be closer to earth then others venues closer to earth . Veuns has the hottest landing point temperture in the solar system .veunes try living there your car woul be floating 30 20 feet above the floor .venus do have features as like earth rocky mountains valleys craters ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+913194a9fe5d,F494E7D49939,"some say we may can vist that plant soon. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a78a427d9ae8,F494E7D49939,The NASA has only one particularly compeliing to study whats beyond what people dont see or dont know for hummans can travel to other plants ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+de8938c9e804,F494E7D49939,"earth the best to keep all living goods in things, poeple ,and creachers alive ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6584855b23b8,F494E7D49939,Thats why its good for people to studdy about thinks an just do so they would know what they getting into .earth right now never sound back to me but earing an learing about differnt plants that maybe we might be able to vist in years is aswome to learn an hear about that its not just one plant we could live on. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+96e1ac512bd8,F4A3A95F16D8,There are many advantages to limiting car usage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+564c593920e2,F4A3A95F16D8,it is better for the environment because it reduces greenhouse gasses and causes less polution and smog. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+330e273e2504,F4A3A95F16D8,Another advantage is car traveling is becoming less nessasary because of citys like New York and new and improved telecommuting methods. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0a8bf42ef0e1,F4A3A95F16D8,"car usage is becoming less popular, this is because of ""no car days"" and people just not bothering to get a car or a license. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c345975cc196,F4A3A95F16D8,"when you limit car usage, it is better for the environment because off all the greenhouse gas reduction caused by not using as many cars and other gas producing vehicles as much ",Claim,Effective,,,
+82dde8f571b2,F4A3A95F16D8,"For example, in source 1, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, it states that "" And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes....passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States"".  50 percent is a large number to be taken up by cars alone, if we can reduce car reduction, we can reduce greenhouse gasses.  Another example of why car reduction is an advantage is because of the pollution and smog areas.  You can clearly see this being stated in source 2, by Robert Duffer, ""[The smog] rivaled Bejing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.""  If Bejing, were to do what Paris did, they too could reduce smog and pollution by car reduction.  Also, in Bogota, Columbia, they have no car days, to limit the amount of smog.  However, limiting car usage to better the environment is not the only reason of why it is an advantage. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64ed6e02964f,F4A3A95F16D8,"For example, as stated in source 4, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, New York, is starting several programs to use cars less, including car-sharing, skyrocket bridge, tunnel tolls, and bike sharing programs.  In that source, it also says that when someone stops using a car, for whatever reason, they find it unnesasary to continue using cars, mostly because some citys are becoming more centralized again, and it's becoming easier to walk to stores.  However, thats not the only reason that it's being less nessasary to own a car. Another reason is because of improved telecommuting methods.  In source 4, Mimi sheller is quoted while talking about how people don't feel the need to drive to see their friend, instead they use their phone or computer to communicate.  Another reason for limiting car usage is because it is becoming less popular. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+146ee22a0186,F4A3A95F16D8,"In cities like Bogota, Cali, and Valledupar, all in Columbia, they have ""Day without cars"" this is one example of cars becoming less popular because, even though it was raining, tons of people still participated.  Another example is in source 4, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, she says that her children, both of age to get a license and living where one might want a license, still have not gotten there license because they do not think it is nessasary, and they simply stay where they can walk, or ride bikes, or take the bus, or the subway.  Mr. Sivak has shown that the number of 16 to 39 year olds that have a license has significantly reduced. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee44651323c7,F4A3A95F16D8,"there are many advantages to limiting car usage including it is better for the environment, it is becoming less nessasary, and it is also becoming less popular.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+38e261443ae0,F4A3B4B14952,"The summer months are a key time for both students and teachers to regroup from the school year that just occurred, and to prepare for the school year that is to come at the end of their short break. This time is important to both groups because it is a more care free period where they are not under the constant pressure school brings. This time can be very beneficial for everyone to prepare for the next school year. Studies have shown that students who do not continue to do educational work over the summer months fall behind and lose the information they gained during the prior school year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+09864027148a,F4A3B4B14952,The most ideal project is teacher-designed because a student will most likely not plan an assignment that is actually helpful or one that prepares them for the upcoming year. ,Position,Effective,,,
+9ab7a12bc91c,F4A3B4B14952,A teacher will be able to design one that prepares the students well for the upcoming curriculum ,Claim,Effective,,,
+53ff64ff8838,F4A3B4B14952,helps them manage their time well over the summer months ,Claim,Effective,,,
+14b82ca1585c,F4A3B4B14952,"A summer assignment is one that will not be necessarily a very difficult one but it will require time management and if done well, can be very beneficial for the students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d58f52626046,F4A3B4B14952,After the long school year the last thing a student wants to do is more work. If a student was to design their own project it probably would not be helpful. A teacher is able to access what is necessary to learn before the class starts and they will be able to create a project that is nothing but beneficial. In my own past experiences the summer projects have never been very difficult but they have required a small amount of my time and energy. When these projects were spread out I was able to complete them well and they helped me. I have never had a project assigned to me over the summer months that was necessarily difficult and I have never received a large amount of them at the same time. It is usually only required by a few core classes and it is not difficult to complete them. The only thing they really require is the time. They need to e done in a timely manor and done to the best ability to prepare for the next year. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5dc1ddc0c82,F4A3B4B14952,"Managing time is one of the most important, yet difficult portion of a summer project but it is also something that is very difficult. Not only is it important for that summer project but those time management skills carry over into the coming school year. A project that is designed by a student may not properly prepare you for the rigor of the curriculum that is to come or the amount of time that is necessary for the class. A teacher creating a project will be able to demonstrate how much time the student will need to put in for their class in the upcoming year. If a student is able to manage their time well during the summer months when there is always something better to do then they will be able to manage all of their classes and those course loads better. They will have a better idea of what they need to do to succeed in the next school year. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50e2a9a8df61,F4A3B4B14952,The classes over the years have only gotten more difficult in my personal experience and before y freshman year none of my teachers assigned any work for me to complete during the summer. I did not know anything about them on the first day or what the courses would be like. It was frightening and looking back I wish at least one of my teachers had assigned some form of work for me to do so that I had some idea of what I was getting into. It was sort of like being thrown into the deep end of a pool before ever learning how to swim. Keeping my head above water wasn't tasking but I was unable to swim to where I wanted. it took a little bit of time before I was actually comfortable in my classes and having some summer work would have made it much easier to transition into those classes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+790bf7ab5e13,F4A3B4B14952,"When I was younger the idea of summer was much different then it is today, just like the school years have changed. When I was younger my parents were involved in most aspects of my life and knew what summer work I had to do. I was taught that in order to succeed, I would have to do the work and do it well. I would never be able to reach my goals if I did not get the necessary things done on time and summer work was no different. Now I know that summer work is a large possibility for my breaks and f it is assigned it should be done. it is being assigned for a reason therefore I should complete it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43f76cf3ce76,F4A3B4B14952,Honestly I do not trust myself enough to create a well thought out project for myself without cutting myself some slack. I would much rather have a teacher give me the assignment and complete it to the best of my abilities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+33c95e408437,F4A3B4B14952,"In conclusion, I believe that all the assignments that I am given during the summer months are well done and should be designed by the teachers instead of the students doing it for themselves. In the past the summer assignments that I have been given have not been too difficult and I never really minded doing them. The teacher is the one who teaches the class and if they expect us to have prior knowledge of the class then they should be the ones designing it. It is not going to be harmful and there is plenty of time over the summer for it to be completed so I do believe that a project designed by teacher over the summer is more beneficial then one that would be designed by a student.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+dc03d28ef055,F4A576AD01D8,"Despite how many set backs people have had with trying to land rovers and other machines on Venus, people are still trying to find a way to gain further knowledge about the planet. With the temperature being set at 800 degrees Fahrenheit, that could be enough alone for human do die. That would be like going into a fire. Even if they managed to build something to with stand higher heat, the atmosphere is made up of 97% carbon dioxide. The planet is practically burning causing carbon dioxide to blanket the whole planet. The atmosphere still stands at a 170 degree temperature. High enough temperature can metal some metals and most materials or burn them. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+596f9e1e44c0,F4A576AD01D8,The author of this article is obviously drawn to exploring Venus to get a better understanding of it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+04aaae1c02ab,F4A576AD01D8,"In the last paragraph it is said that ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2120d4a15fb,F4A576AD01D8,"The authoer is just saying that no matter how big the danger is, even if it is risky, we shouldn't be set back by it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+388cf42d343a,F4A576AD01D8,"Sometimes, somethings are better left unexplored because it could have risks that people don't even know of. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f36171acf588,F4A576AD01D8,"If they are somehow able to make a machine that is able to withstand the harsh climate of Venus, they will want to send a person up there one day won't they? But I human most likely will never be able to withstand those conditions even if they were in a machine that protected them. Heat causes things to expand which can eventually expand the metal enough and expose that person to heat and carbon dioxide. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+214d039a122f,F4A576AD01D8,"In conclusion, despite how many times people have tried to land rovers and machines on Venus, they will one day find a way to perfect those machines and may be able to send a person up there to gather further research on the planet. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d93285f4e0b5,F4DB6C7A51BA,In this article it talks about the face of Mon Lisa. Many of people have wondered and thought what Mona was feeling or was trying to express. Will now they came out with a new software were it recgonizes and tell the experssions of ones face. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+22bcbe2578e3,F4DB6C7A51BA,"To me I don't like the idea of the software, it can be subatage to someones art. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e27dc6e2898a,F4DB6C7A51BA,"In parapgraph one in the beginning of the sentnce it gives you bunch of facial expressions that Mona is giving. The software indicates several expressions that she is making. In paragraph 3 says when the process begins, the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. They recognize the the muscles and what the face is expressing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b0570d511ef,F4DB6C7A51BA,To me this software of a cheat cheat to art ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca07d3521adc,F4DB6C7A51BA,"Art is meant to be looked at, to be studied and to make you more intrested in the art. You can have a millions of questions about an art piece the cool thing about the Mona Lisa is that it is a very famous painting, why because it was unique, people wondering for many years to see if she is smiling or no or what she's is expressing. in paragraph 5 says,""We humans perform this same impressive ""calculation"" every day."" Which is a good thing becuase we learn more about the face and how they make it with expressions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c01e248ddc7,F4DB6C7A51BA,"A software shouldn't be able to tell what they're expressing it just makes you not observe the photo anymore as much, because now that they may know what she's expressing she won't have the much popular attention to it like it did before. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0475904ddff3,F4DB6C7A51BA,"Says in paragraph 6,""The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows how much this computer can do."" Really it even says imagine a computer knowing when your happy or sad, to me thats just invasion to a person, you can always tell you how you are feeling and many just decide to keep them to themselves. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1232109ab356,F4DB6C7A51BA,"Many people have their way of expressing themselves and sometimes you can be curious of how they're feeling. Which is good because the more you look at something you study it and you put piece and piece together until you solve it. Look at pragraph 7, it gives you something to do while your looking in the mirror, to make a face expression, and the face they told you to make was smiling. It's showing how easily you can describe someone face just by describing the face and the muscle form. It's not always good for everyone to know what you're face is expressing because thats just dull. It's not important for people to know, which will just make you more curious of you ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c2628db7c728,F4DB6C7A51BA,"Just as long as you know what your feeling, and thats what I think the artist that did this painting was trying to achieve. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a91a58d0dae0,F4DB6C7A51BA,"This is my opinion on the software. I think that it is useless. It really is something that is happening now in this world is that technology is taking over us and what we do. We barley use our brains to study or read over something because we use the internet for that. We don't play outside or even try to look at new things in the world because were distacted by our phones or the tv. Most people are barley active and decide just to lay around and look at a screen. Now this is another thing less for a person to worry about, and slowly things that we are capable of doing by ourselves and using our head wouldn't be neccary because there's a sofware to that for us. Artist express themselves in art and they want people to figure it out and admire their painting, not a software to tell us. We become intelligent more each day if we use our head and take time to think about and thats something that is good for the people.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+31cad2310398,F50D3D001E67,Students should or should or should not do at least one extracrrcular activity ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+92ee039ebf96,F50D3D001E67,"Students should, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ea76fd33828d,F50D3D001E67,sports help with physical strength ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b150664f3fd6,F50D3D001E67,help you stay in shape ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c36f2381e06,F50D3D001E67,If you are doing community services your helping do better thing for your communtiy before its too late. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8dfd3d8dbda0,F50D3D001E67,"in most sports you have to run such as volleyball, football, track, basketball, etc. With running you have to gain muscule so when you run your legs wont be tired or worn out. Also its not just running and using your legs if you are a lineman in football you have to use most of your uper body to push people away. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a349a14a8639,F50D3D001E67,"with all running and and jummping and moving around, you become more in shape and cordinated. The population is getting more unfit as we know it. People are going on there phones and that's all they do they dont excursice. Some children are overweight, by doing a sport they could because more in shape. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84ce089030a9,F50D3D001E67,"Were they embetter the earth, by cleaning up beaches, getting trash out of the ocean, and by coming up with ways to make the world a better place for humans and animals. Earth we know is over pollutated with evrbody's trash students should try to help the earth get better. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09dcf8f62834,F50D3D001E67,"With the sports also helps kids get more in shape and gets ther pysical stregth up. Also as we know our population is getting more obeis with sports we can provent that.
+
+Altogether with everything thats going on we should help the earth get back into its healthy state by do community services too. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1093ab269a91,F55EF5BB5CB9,"I think yes, it can help students with their feeing ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7bc4468ddcdf,F55EF5BB5CB9,becuase my first reason is becuase emotions matter alot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e00252ec87b1,F55EF5BB5CB9,My seconed reason is becuase reason a article can halp people feel better if they pay good attions to what the story says. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+969e2611a8c9,F55EF5BB5CB9,"my last reason is becuase showing feelings they the way we look. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+13c7cac20df2,F55EF5BB5CB9,My first reason it can help students becuase by the way people read the story and look at the foto there is a lot of ways to look and read it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28f933294e90,F55EF5BB5CB9,If there is a person who really is feeling sad they can read a story that has a lil og exititing moments on the story and with happy pictues that shows the feelings of the story. It can help alot beuase by looking at the pictuce and really paying attintion to the story it can grab the readers attintion. Once th author got the readers attiontion the reader is going to be focesed of what the book is about and going to make them change their feelings. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b34421586df,F55EF5BB5CB9,My seconed reason by reading the article it can change feelings. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24d873c6855a,F55EF5BB5CB9,"It can make then get into the feeling they want to get into eather it can be mad, sad, happy scared, exited, ect. There is a lot of feeling people can get into if they into what the author want to tell them by reading. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f5f219f23072,F55EF5BB5CB9,My last reason is by the way they look ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9485e7e503b5,F55EF5BB5CB9,Not alot of the people show they way they feel. If people dont show how they feel it becuase most of the idea is becuase hey are holding there feelings down deep in them. If they not showing it most people say they dont show it because they dont want to make people worry becuase they are in a bad mood and just dont want to get bothered. They try to show they are stong but deep dow they are holding a hard feelings they they going to remember at some other time becuase they are heoding it in them and they are the people who just dont want to do stuff at a surten time. The people who show there feeings i think they are the people who have the most good time becuase they get rid of that feeling. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6145bc88db3,F55EF5BB5CB9,Inconcluion that is my three reasons why it think it can help people when they are in the mood they dont want to be in. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ce5efab5c397,F5D927221FB8,The point of these sources are to tell you to stop pollution and stop driving cars so much. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0acb2f865428,F5D927221FB8,"Us as humans drive around town or wherever so much to the point where there is so much gas in the air to kill someone. In the first source it says, "" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way."" Some people don't have enough to afford a car or even pay the monthly payments on them a couple months after they purchase one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eaae4fdea812,F5D927221FB8,There is a small amount of people who would not like to own cars only because they didn't have the money for one or just didn't want to deal with the hassal of payments each month. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39d7c1c7ec30,F5D927221FB8,"In source two it says, ""On Monday motorists with even-numbered liscense plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31)."" It's kinda sad when you have to tell people to stay home and not drive their cars. Maybe some people need to leave their house a certain day and that isn't the day that they need to go somewhere, it's so stupid to fine someone if they need to go somewhere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0244c3968907,F5D927221FB8,"The world/ it's people shouldn't have to be controled by the government or whatever to be told when they can leave their house in a car, it's so stupid. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+75c0f2399747,F5D927221FB8,"I understand that they want to find a way to stop having so much smog in the area. But I mean, what's the point? You can't catch everyone that is out on a certain day that isn't in the right vehicle or has the right numbers on their lisence plate. I think it's so ridicoulus that people should even have to assign days when people can leave or when they can't leave. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7172a3b717c4,F5EFE72B5E63,This history is about Venus ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e39cdb2cba9a,F5EFE72B5E63,NASA is trying to go to the planet call Venus because is the planet that look just like Earth. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c59437b639f4,F5EFE72B5E63,"They want to go because they want to show how Venus look like. So people can go live in Venus, but NASA don't want to send people because is so danger.
+
+In the solar system Venus is the second plane from the sun.
+
+Venus is call the ""Evening Star"" because it is the brightest point of light in the night sky.
+
+It is the twin planet of the Earth because it have the same side of the Earth, and in distance is the closed plane that Earth have.
+
+""Each previous mission was unmanned, and good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.
+
+Venus have 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. On other planets the temperature average is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric is abuot 90 times greater than what we experience.
+
+""Also Venus have the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even Mecury is closer to our sun.
+
+Long time ago Venus was probably covered by ocean and could have supported varius forms of life, just like Earth.
+
+NASA is trying to make mechanical computer the ones that help a lot in WW II, so they don't have to used people, but they have to use more tegnology. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee31705fdd2e,F5EFE72B5E63,"In conclution that is a good idea because human need more space to live and some people like the idea to explor what is outside the Earth.
+
+""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation"".    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9b6f081e522b,F634BC92DC39,"Phone use and driving are two activities that should never be intertwined. Using a phone while driving is not acceptable. The level of distraction that comes from using a phone takes a driver's attention away from the road. A driver's attention should be focused on the roadway, not a phone screen. Cell phone use while operating a motor vehicle has led to a heartbreaking amount of people losing their lives and even more injuries. It is simply not safe and can lead to dangerous and heart wrenching moments. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+23a1d6b25100,F634BC92DC39,Cell phone use while driving needs to be banned nationwide. It will not cease to occur unless people see and hear the damage it can inflict. ,Position,Effective,,,
+9139e07ef4ba,F634BC92DC39,"When someone is using their phone while operating a motor vehicle, it takes a significant amount of attention away from the road, and onto the phone instead. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cd5fe2726353,F634BC92DC39,"Looking down at a cell phone for 5 sec while going just 55 mph means that you have just crossed the length of an entire football field without looking up at the road. The AAA Foundation For Traffic Safety ranked using a hands-free mobile device as a level 2 distraction and texting while operating a vehicle as a level 3 distraction, the highest level. Such distractions are unacceptable when operating a motor vehicle, it could lead to injuries or worse. A study conducted by Cambridge Mobile Telematics revealed that roughly 52% of drives that resulted in a crash were caused by distracted driving, and roughly eleven teens die per day as a result of texting and driving. Inexperienced drivers, such as teens, are more prone to engage in distracted driving, and are more likely to suffer a crash or accident when engaging in distracted driving. Having your attention focused on anything other than the road is a terrible and dangerous idea, and should not be tolerated under any circumstance. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+314ef2fa8cff,F634BC92DC39,"Using a phone while driving, be it calling, texting, or anything else, can lead to horrible and heartbreaking injuries and even deaths. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dbde271eef6b,F634BC92DC39,"In 2016 alone, distracted driving took the lives of 3,450 drivers, and injured over 300,000 more. Using a phone while driving is a gamble with death. The CDC reports that nine people are killed and more than 1,000 people are injured daily as a result of distracted driving. Despite knowing these facts, many drivers still report that they engage in distracted driving, usually via phone. The individuals who choose not to use their phone while driving realize the consequences of distracted driving, and choose to seek the benefits of not using a phone while driving. Cell phone use while driving is a horrible practice. Sending a text is most certainly not worth a human life. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+58f5c30557c6,F634BC92DC39,"Using a phone while on the road is, as said, a dangerous practice, and must come to an end. The best way to prevent phone use on the road is legislation. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2edc960b4b3,F634BC92DC39,"New laws or stricter punishments on these laws would likely reduce the likelihood that people would choose to text or call while driving. There are ways to prevent phone use while driving that do not necessarily involve government. Making sure individuals, especially teens, know the risks behind using a phone while driving can persuade them to stop or not start. For teens, stricter penalties from parents would also dissuade them. Give instructions to new drivers to specifically not get on their phone while operating a motor vehicle. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0200bc961cd0,F634BC92DC39,"Using a phone while driving, or being distracted by any piece of technology for that matter, is not acceptable. Lives have been lost, many have been injured, and vehicles have been totaled, all because of a call or text message. Laws must be put in place, and knowledge must be spread to end this practice. When driving, please put your phone down, and instead focus your attention to the task at hand.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+eb189b1f74e5,F63F47E95B90,"First of all studying venus isn't a bad idea wanting to explore the deepest point of venus can change history and life, we can figure out many secrets that venus has and what kind of life form could be on venus because in every planet their's always something that hasn't been discovered. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8dd9a0b07fff,F63F47E95B90,"Venus is a planet that will soon be explored NASA has been sending spacecrafts to land on venus but they still don't make it, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3c1f30796760,F63F47E95B90,"For three decades many factors contribute to venus reputation and has been a challenge for humans to study, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54dd67f10c9f,F63F47E95B90,"97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets venus and clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere and a temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit and atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than what we expirence on earth those conditions are way to extreme that humans don't encounter that on earth 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1d236792d989,F63F47E95B90,Another reason why it should be studied more and have future plans that someday people from NASA will land ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8f6b561fe13,F63F47E95B90,is that because many astronomers believe that venus may have once been the most earth-like planet in our solar system and that venus was onced probably covered largely with oceans and could've been many forms of life in venus many many years ago. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45b047a101ec,F63F47E95B90,"Many scientist are looking for a way to get samples of rocks,gas,or anthing else that they can use to find out more about venus but they cannot do that ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5d10aa645c64,F63F47E95B90,many researchers are working on innovations that will allow machines to last longer so they can get enough samples for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef9fe1b41028,F63F47E95B90,Overall i think that finding new ways to explore and studie venus is a great idea i think that will change history maybe in the future venus can become our second home if we find out more about it and venus will soon be an explored planet and hope that will continue with other planets. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d4529d3fc2b6,F647D77D7396,"Its 1983, the stickiness of your fingers still reminisce the apricot you ate earlier while the beating sun destroys the meaning for sunglasses. The thought of eighty-seven more days stuck in your families summer house somewhere in Northern Italy with nothing but books, music, and your bike makes the thought of going back to school almost exciting. While you lay on your chair that afternoon, you remember that your previous History teacher assigned a project on ""The Roaring Twenties"". To be true, homework did not seem the most appealing activity to accomplish during that hot summer day, never the less, you were meaning to get up and wash your filthy hands of apricot juice. The project consisted of a writing assignment and a piece of self-made artwork. While the assignment felt like it would take all summer to accomplish, all of your previous knowledge kept flooding back like school was just yesterday. With no library within a three-mile radius, there was no need. Your project was finished within a week and the rest of your summer was dedicated to lounging beside the lake near your house and your grandfathers old books he left behind dating back to the early 1900's. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+596853c5e07a,F647D77D7396,Summer projects designed by a students teacher is more effective in preserving a students learning from the previous year ,Position,Effective,,,
+48ec37c3713c,F647D77D7396,"students will have a set assignment directly related to previous school work, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d35a9d16c3eb,F647D77D7396,"an abundance of notes for additional help, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2f8b9a31e3e8,F647D77D7396,it readies students for their future occupations that will not have three-month breaks. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+012fa581dc0f,F647D77D7396,"During school holidays, teachers are unable to assign work or projects to students because their breaks are dedicated to leaving ones mind at rest. Though students are unable to receive work over short-term breaks, work over the summer is optional for most teachers. While a break from constant learning is needed for the mind to repair itself, stopping all academic thought can effect the students recovery back into their new school term. Summer assignments most often consist of a short paper or vocabulary words needed for the upcoming year, all achievable within a couple weeks. Not only does being able to accomplish such little work in such a large amount of time show responsibility but it also prepares the student for larger sums of upcoming work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+36130f172070,F647D77D7396,"Students learn up to four units a year and are assigned up to two projects per unit. Within the year, students attend around 240 classes per-year in taking around 1,920 hours of learning. Within all of the lessons and assignments, one is able to remember an abundant amount of information per-unit, allowing a student to combine all work into a project. Assume a project was based on biodiversity of animals within the agricultural system. With knowledge from ones own memory combined with notes and previous assignments, a project that consists of a 500-word summery of biodiversity will seem like a quick explanation. Though many children around the world suffer from short-term memory loss or just have difficulty harnessing previous knowledge, additional help from previous worksheets to study from or a phone call to a friend that has the same assignment might be able to significantly give a boost of memory or a kick-start. If all is lost from the previous year and making a phone call is not an option, libraries and the vast online knowledge of the web can help support uneasy topics and questions. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4dcecba69aaf,F647D77D7396,"Most occupations don't give out ""summer breaks"" for adults because a company can't run without their employees constantly focused on doing their work. While children are allowed a three-month break, during college, a student is no longer under the control of their guardians. Most college students don't get their parents to pay for their all of their supplies anymore. Reciving summer work is just a small step to the upcoming constant work of employees. To make sure students are ready to become an intern or employee, their teachers responsibilities are to make sure students are able to implement previous knowledge into future tasks. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+06c599596412,F647D77D7396,"When teachers assign work to students, its not for their own benefit. While most people think that teachers enjoy giving work, they're the ones spending countless hours correcting and grading their students assignments. By the end of ones long hot summer, all of the long nights and amazing memories are not only something special to ones heart, it can also be a kiss from an enemy. The amount of work that was constantly being inserted into a students mind disappears and with the new year approaching, the time it takes for each student to remember all of the hundreds of hours worth of information can be spent learning new topics. Summer assignments designed by teachers are most effective for each individual student because it implements previous information learned by students, allows students to find required tools to complete assigned work without a teacher, and finally prepares one for future occupations that work a students mind constantly throughout the summer.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+46f56d766d10,F699067454F2,"You will be wondering what theirs a face on Mars,well we do not know for sure. Some scienitst are saying that the ""Face on Mars"" are provided from aliens (Aliens are living in Mars?). They discover the face in 1976,that is when they took the photo they lastest image is from 2001 ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+95796f7247ea,F699067454F2,"Also another scientist are saying (am one of them) that ""It is just a rock ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f5830403de3d,F699067454F2,It has natural grow ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b0449e658acd,F699067454F2,its not a mask & just a rock ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e41cbb6cf28,F699067454F2,"Did you know that 50% of scientist think that it is a mask from aliens & the other 50% of scientist think it is just a natural landform. ""A few days later NASA unveilded the image for all to see. The caption noted a huge rock formation. . .which resembles a human head. . .formed by shadows giving the ilusion of eyes,nose & mouth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f04561df0afa,F699067454F2,"And i still think it just a rock, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3932bf79769a,F699067454F2,"Do you still think that its still their (i do so) because it is a rock, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bae378912563,F699067454F2,"rocks dont die,they are hard rocks we have & they never die. But am not that convience how can a rock change by its years,but also maybe because it is a different type of rock (its in the space) I thinking that the rock changes by the time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e9b8d400cf3,F699067454F2,"Its just a rock that looks strange dont all rocks look strange they are all unique & some strange ones they are a lot of type of rocks in the life,dont think the the rocks are the same. Were different. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+49adc55bf122,F6A15556865B,Kids and young adults that go down wrong paths can change. After school or extracurricular can help that ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0d9d2eb76834,F6A15556865B,I think that students having to participate in a extracurricular activity is one of the best things a school can do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2e04e3d06d7,F6A15556865B,Even if its just a homework club. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d53ee4b9c3c,F6A15556865B,It will keep them busy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd76e7071845,F6A15556865B,will help them exceed academically ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+caaa32e4b42c,F6A15556865B,It will help build strong relationships with there peers and teachers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3d0ad55c999,F6A15556865B,Students that participate in extracurricular will exceed academy and will not go down a path of illegal activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+61324602dc1f,F6A15556865B,"Gangs are rising everywhere there technique is too bring in middle school students. As there developing physically and mentally, also middle school gets out early so there home before there parents. Some feel like there parents don't show the same love or don't care. So they turn to people who they think do. When people start making promises and make you feel good you want to be around them more. A gang is not the answer but most will turn to one. Gangs are telling young adults to do many things such as shoot up a rival gang, homicide. and drive bye. These can land you in prison for up to a life time. Teen are so easy to take advantage of.
+
+Its not always gangs. Teen brains are still developing. The miss lead and boredness can lead to drugs use. Most teen are miss lead when its comes to drugs. A friend can say its cool or celebrity and then they all think it's cool. When teens are bored or left alone they turn to drugs. They feel as comfort and they get addicted. Drug usage can lead to overdose and even death. Its important the kids always have an trusted adult beside there parents to talk to.
+
+As a victim of this I believe after school was a perfect fit for me. I got to surrounded myself by friends and teachers. It also helped me academically excel and I always had something to do ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a0f3281870d,F6A15556865B,My advice to people is if you have to try to be someone friend there not your friend. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4aee0d6e29ee,F6A15556865B,Over all kids should be forced to participate in extracurricular. It will set them on a straight path. They will excel academically and have better relationships with there there peers. It will keep then out of trouble in and out of school. It is important for kids to set on the right path at a young age so they can continue that in the future. After school is a blessing. It can save lives. What if your child was in that position?  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+366fbbc5fe46,F6A92E43251E,I don't like how the students have to pick what they what to do what if they don't what to do noting and I feel like they are getting focus to do something they don't what to do. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f59d5f81a01f,F6A92E43251E,But some kids would like it because they like sports or to work on the yearbook for the school or take serve on the student council. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+37462ab15870,F6A92E43251E,But the other student they dont like to do any of that but they are being focus to do stuff. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ddfc4d742b51,F6A92E43251E,The principal should not focus the kids to do something they don't what to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8abb56fbf5b1,F6A92E43251E,"the principal should ask if they what to do it or not. Because that is more stuff that they got to do and it is not fair on them. And the kids are not going to like there principal no more because the principal is making them do stuff that they don't what to do. And I feel like they should have freedom. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8e812d3f8d1,F6A92E43251E,I disagree.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9c1203e558c1,F6CFA4C7247B,"Have you ever seen something that looked like a extra terestrial sight like crop circles, well NASA's Viking 1 saw something that looked like an egyptian face while circling Mars looking for a place for its sister ship (Viking 2). 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5cc3f7c60eb3,F6CFA4C7247B,"In 1976, a photo of what was though to be a Ancient Egyptian Face turned out to be a hoax (unintentionally) and was actually just a Land formation with inclined rocks that formed a Shadow that conveyed illusions of two eyes a nose and a mouth. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+36983002ec6a,F6CFA4C7247B,"At first this was a very succesful and popular image, a section from the article states that "" The Face On Mars has becoma a pop icon, that starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk show and even haunted stores for 25 years"". this states that this photo was a clear sign of Extarestrial life, at least at the time. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bb388e58907c,F6CFA4C7247B,"Although many people beleived this theory was a Alien artifact it was eventually disproven on April 5, 1998 ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+20c814c1dcf1,F6CFA4C7247B,"as shown on the article ""And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed2632f746a9,F6CFA4C7247B,Allthough many people still believe that scientists must have missed something and that it really is a allien artifact ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+63281dc44047,F6CFA4C7247B,"sorry to burtst your bubble but, you are wrong. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+4a07bd42ecfd,F6CFA4C7247B,"See Scientists have been working on this theory for very many years they have gone back and looked at it multiple times, retaken pictures from multiple different angles, Enlarged x3 and still the only thing there is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4cc4f2136673,F6CFA4C7247B,"On april 8, 2001 a Mars Global surveyor drew close enough for a second look. They then rolled the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view, Malins team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. ""Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 156 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1978 Viking photo"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96e247900f50,F6CFA4C7247B,"So from all of the information from this article it is confirmed that ""The Face"" isn't really a extraterestrial artifact, but just a measly illusion.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ad99141a5b28,F6DA09C9C0C1,Did you know that 6 out of 10 kids do extracurricular activities? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+51f6034a1de5,F6DA09C9C0C1,I agree that the principal should make everybody do at least one extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be8383b36865,F6DA09C9C0C1,There are so many different things to choose from as your extracurricular activity. You could do a sport or you could even join a club. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42b90b865728,F6DA09C9C0C1,"I agree with the principal because you could make new friends, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11d97351fc0a,F6DA09C9C0C1,"you can join a club, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+46898a82e171,F6DA09C9C0C1,you can join a sports team and it can help you to stay healthy and fit. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a85d3e0095db,F6DA09C9C0C1,"Schools offer many different sports that you can play. You can do boys or girls basketball, softball, boys or girls track and field, volleyball, wrestling, and field hockey. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb7c6940372b,F6DA09C9C0C1,If you decide that you want to do a sport there are so many positive things to get out of it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+302396aa19ed,F6DA09C9C0C1,"Even if sports arent your thing then you could join a club. Schools have lots of clubs including, chess, reading club, homework club, NJHS, video game club and, the green team. There are lots of clubs at schools to join and if you decide to join a club that you've never done before or that you've never even heard of you may end up liking it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bccf504abf02,F6DA09C9C0C1,Joining clubs can inspire you to venture out and maybe even continue on with that club outside of school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7956942758ad,F6DA09C9C0C1,Extracurricular activities can help you make new friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce9866663ec7,F6DA09C9C0C1,4 out of 10 friends start in extracurricular activities. Lots of people who meet while doing a sport or a club end up staying friends for life. School is an amazing place to make new friends. You will never know or experience such great things unless you try. Having a friend that enjoys the same things that you enjoy is good too because you guys can relate on many things. While you go to practice you will always have a partner and you guys can even practice together outside of school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70e38c488217,F6DA09C9C0C1,"I completely agree with the principals decision. Going to school may be your least favorite thing to do but if you have something to look forward to then school may become your new favorite place. School is a great place to venture out and try new things. Extracurricular activities include sports and clubs and they are a great idea and something that everyone needs to do. The principal has a good point of view because there are so many things to choose from, you could play a sport, join a club and, make new friends.          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9e7b44469f29,F6E5F858A19A,The Facial Ation Coding System(FACS) is seeming to be useful in a classroom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e78ff1844637,F6E5F858A19A,it can detect when someone may be confused on a certain subject. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fb80b436e30,F6E5F858A19A,As well as the FACS can detect if there are emotional issues that are imparing the student to learn. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba234c5459a6,F6E5F858A19A,"To begin with the FACS computer, it's seeming to be useful because if a student is being confused during a lesson and the teacher can be notified and the problem can be resolved. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a681e3f02f34,F6E5F858A19A,"In addition the FACS can help a teacher by checking to identify if the students are genuinly having fun and not only be for the students but help the teacher create a mor fun and enjoyable time in class while still learning. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f58a3ed420cc,F6E5F858A19A,"In addition, the FACS can detect if a student is havimg emotional issudes and the teacher or staff can see if they can fix the problem. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4f7d1ecec0d,F6E5F858A19A,And as well as fixing some problems at home because there are cases where some of the emotional problems transfer in to school and impare the student to learn. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+63a5ad336d93,F6E5F858A19A,In conclusion the FACS would be a great learning tool for the classrooms. Including helpful resource for students and teachers so they can make class enjoyable. And finally to help with figuring out the problem. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c0c59a668471,F7115AFBA798,Cellphones have advanced a lot in many years from flip phones to smart phones but as the years have gone by we have come more and more addicted to them and its causing a problem to us humans especially when it comes to driving us humans are at fault for driving and causing accidents on the road due to our cellphone addiction. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+058447b9d88a,F7115AFBA798,Cellphones and driving have been a main cause for deaths over the years. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac9723b923b5,F7115AFBA798,Cellphones and driving are as bad as drinking and driving because both can cause death. Cellphones are a huge distraction when on the road as the driver is not focused enough on the road and may cause an accident. Cellphones require humans to use both hands but may get there eye off the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae812c98fd5b,F7115AFBA798,Cellphones should be banned while using in car. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+68fd74499df1,F7115AFBA798,Cellphones being used while driving should be given a huge ticket fine and be given court for putting their lives and someone else live in danger or should even be put behind bars. Cellphones should be put on do not disturb when operating a motor vehicle. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2343d002248f,F7137F027A05,"The first time NASA first spotted the Face on Mars was in 1976 during the Viking 1 mission. At first the scientists back at NASA were surprised, but it did not last long. After some research was done scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa. What made the mesa look like a face were just shadows. When the image was revealed to the public it got a lot of attention. Although some believed the face was a sign of alien life, others were not as easily convinced. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+43b978b55609,F7137F027A05,The first picture was taken in 1976 when technology was not very great ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+026c4e7e5eaa,F7137F027A05,"So in 1997
+
+NASA 's Mars Exploration Program chief scientist, Jim Garvin decided he'd try to get another photo. On April 8, 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over the site again. Michael Malin and his MOC team took a picture that was, ""Ten times sharper than the original Viking photos,"" the article says ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c53addd1d63e,F7137F027A05,But other conspiricy theorists think otherwise. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+24545fc15b33,F7137F027A05,The article mentions that the Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude. It was apparently winter there in April of '98. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+67b0a5c3edd6,F7137F027A05,"Skeptics say, ""Perhaps alien markings were hidden by the haze."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+57240ec2c379,F7137F027A05,"Garvin says, ""Targeting Cydonia was not easy...in fact it is hard to work ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0cdd5c078669,F7137F027A05,"Mars Global Surveyor noramally looks straight down but in order to get a good picture, they would have to actually move the camera 2.5 km. They also do not pass over the face very often. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1128bee94fd2,F7137F027A05,"On April 8, 2001 they attempted another picture. This time the picture was perfect ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdb67e10d010,F7137F027A05,"It was a cloudless day in Cyndonia. ""The team had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view."" Garvin said. Not easy work. The article also mentions that each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to the 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photos. I think that this picture did really prove that the Face was only a landform and not some kind of martian marking. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+117e15228954,F7137F027A05,In the end people came to relize that the Face on Mars was really on a butte or a mesa of some sort. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+903ab010ebe4,F7137F027A05,"Garvin says, ""So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground...you could have seen what they were."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+910c5975018d,F7137F027A05,I personally do not think the Face is part of ancient Martian life ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c0196b12723,F7137F027A05,"as Garvin says, ""It reminds me of most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45bedccd7069,F7137F027A05,I hope now that the others that once believed in the face now relize it really was only their imagination.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef412501b2b4,F73047E4DC36,I think the auther is being very un biased about wether or not we should go to venus. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4d765e135733,F73047E4DC36,It can be riducolusly dangorous and will kill anyone that steps foot on venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+830098f1bad3,F73047E4DC36,"They talk about how Venus is hotter then Mercery which si the planet closest to the sun. Venus is hotter because of the pressure and dnesity that the atomoshere carries. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d3d69c5b833,F73047E4DC36,Also the fact that the pressure is so bad that if you but a submerne on Venus it would instantly liquafy as if it was nothing. That makes a great deal when trying to get there. Id otn doubt that anyone is not finding out the mos that they can when going to venus ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3db6f54bdda8,F73047E4DC36,I dint really think it would be a great idea sense there isnt much chance of survival ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0dfd8fd6b08,F73047E4DC36,Going to Mars sound my relable to me. The idea of hovering over venus would make much more sense do to the fact that anyone who steps foot on Venus would most likley die. But there must be tons of risks to even just hovering over the planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e8595f3fc47,F73047E4DC36,I do belive that we should study venus but i dont think we should do it at the expensie of peoples lives. Maybe we could invent a high tech rover ot explore the outside of venus. People dying probably wouldnt help anything. Stuying it from affar is the best way for things to go without people dying. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+905ee75691e2,F7561C027920,"In high school, summer projects (especially for advanced placement classes) are assignments that students must complete. There is no way to get out from completing those assignments. Teachers create most of these summer projects because they know exactly what the students should learn before they reach the first class of the year. For example, AP Language and Composition has the students create 15 precis on different nonfiction pieces and read the book
+
+Thank You for Arguing in order to prepare for some of the essays that will be written for the exam. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e68dc0b0ce1c,F7561C027920,"Although many people believe that teachers should create these summer projects because the students would know exactly what they need to learn or prepare for, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e4a20c66f18f,F7561C027920,students should be the ones creating the summer projects ,Position,Adequate,,,
+24768b8476cc,F7561C027920,"it gives them a chance to show their creativity, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+013a0127de6f,F7561C027920,"use their skills from prior knowledge, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c050cb360c7c,F7561C027920,"build on life skills needed for the future. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+92277b3b0619,F7561C027920,Giving the students the ability to use their creativity is very important because it lets their voices and thoughts be heard. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0d670880a94c,F7561C027920,"Students usually have more time over the summer to be able to express their creativity, but that is being pulled back due to the same projects that teachers have them do every year. For example, most high school math classes provide students with a four to six page study guide to complete over the summer to make sure that their prior knowledge is still remembered. What if students created their own, unique study guides to complete? How about a presentation on the basics of a unit and sharing it with the class the first or second day back? Not only would the students be able to use their creativity in a project and express their knowledge in many different ways, students in the first class would have a great review of prior knowledge to prepare them for the challenge ahead. Giving students an assignment that they create also makes them more interested and determined to complete their project. Most students would rather show what they learned their own way than the same way as everyone else, and a lot of teacher-designed assignments have the students all doing the same thing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+acb4b0c0208b,F7561C027920,"It might be easier for the teacher to grade or review, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c760d941f32e,F7561C027920,"but students aren't enjoying the assignment because they aren't able to express their knowledge that is different from everyone else. Letting the students create their own projects will give them the opportunity to be creative and express their ideas. Additionally, students will continue to use or remember the skills and knowledge prior to help them create their projects. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c0ee0d285a72,F7561C027920,"The biggest reason why these summer projects are created is so that students wouldn't lose the skills and knowledge from previous years that are need for their upcoming classes. If the students created their own summer projects, they would not lose those skills or knowledge at all. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+79d4ab8ddda8,F7561C027920,"More than likely, they would research more about certain skills or information in order to make their projects even better and stand out from their peers. Subjects such as science and english are definitely able to make this happen because the skills and techniques that are learned can always be worked on, and they are easier for students to share what they know about certain topics. For example, AP chemistry has everyone doing the same assignment before the school year starts. Students in AP Chemistry, instead, could create their own experiments with the skills and knowledge acquired from Research Chemistry. The students would not only keep the techniques/skills practiced and knowledge from the year before, but also have the opportunity to explore different skills or use the skills obtained at a more advanced level. Even though students wouldn't lose the skills and knowledge learned from previous classes, they would also learn and build on some others skills such as life skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+140393100aef,F7561C027920,Student-designed projects would build on skills that students need for the future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5f85dd95f010,F7561C027920,"Teachers help them practice life skills with these projects as they could be long and tedious. However, students should have opportunities to build these skills themselves to prepare them for the upcoming school year and their future in general. Students who would work really hard on their own summer projects build their organizational skills as they plan out their assignments. Time management is another skill that is taken into these projects. Practicing time management prepares them for college and their future careers as deadlines can't be rearranged, and some tasks take more time than others. They would be able to schedule how much time in a day they can work on their summer assignments. Students who create their own projects also practice focusing and perseverance. There will be times where the project comes to a stand still in progress; practicing focus and perseverance encourages students to not give up on their projects and to make it the best it can be. In conclusion, students will prepare themselves for future tasks such as college projects and career projects when they create their own summer projects in high school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f6700fa7692b,F7561C027920,"So, what is the point on arguing about whether students or teachers should create the summer projects? These projects set up the students for what is coming in the following school year. The knowledge and skills used in previous classes are still needed for the upcoming classes. However, when students are able to be creative and make their own projects, those skills and knowledge would never leave them. In fact, teachers would be amazed at how advanced the skills of their students are because the students were actually interested in learning more to create an amazing summer project. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+450d9cc41e62,F76B24B4AB78,"This artical is telling us how Venus get called "" Evening Star."" Venus is a planet in our solar system not everyone knows that because some people don't care. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7fc22036178f,F76B24B4AB78,But what people didn't know about Venus is that humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to Venus. The thing about Venus is that everytime we send a spacecraft is only lasts for a few hours. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e30763630bff,F76B24B4AB78,"They're going to try sending more spacecrafts because ""Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limitdating endeavors"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7118901c57aa,F76B24B4AB78,"When they called Venus ""Evening Star"" beacause during the evening you could see Venus so clear. The reason why you could seen Venus not just because how bright Venus was but also because Venus is closer to us then you think. BUt the point of the nickname is because Venus is a misleading panet in our solar system.
+
+We say that Earth and Venus are twins because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. People might think that when we say twins they might think that everything is the say on Venus but nobody know how Venus looks like because everytime we send the spacecraft in only last for a few hours. Never enough hours or days to see everything we want to see and view. The speed of Venus ""means orbit the sun at different speeds."" This probably mean why not spaceship don't last for very long in Venus.
+
+""The atmosphere on Earth 97 percent dioxide blankets Venus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c76ca486cb6c,F76B24B4AB78,Which makes that it's going to be more hard than we thought. Even though it might be more complicated we're still going to find a way. We want to know everything on Venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+049fa019ec35,F76B24B4AB78,"So what are going to try doing is keep sending spacecrafts because"" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not intimedating endeavors"" what they mean by this is that they aren't going to stop untiul they find a way to be on Venus longer than a few hours. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cfceb2bfdcc3,F776F9881474,Have you ever had to do a summer project because I have and it sucked because the project that the teacher gave me was boring but if I got to choose my summer project I would choose something that I will enjoy and be able to learn. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5565dcea4453,F776F9881474,"If students had a choice to pick a summer project or let the teacher decide I am pretty sure most if not all of the students will let them self choose. I remember when I was in like 5th or 6th grade and my teacher was like ""I know its the end of the year but you guys and girls are gonna have to do a summer project"". After she said that everyone hated her for the rest if the summer and not just because she gave us a summer project but also because it was very boring ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ce4e3fe5ea1,F776F9881474,if it was not boring then I am pretty sure everyone would not be as mad as they were. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb4f6446395c,F776F9881474,I believe that if students got to choose the summer project then more students will get it done. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58c6f0098511,F776F9881474,I know for a fact that if I was to get a summer project it would not most likely not get done but if I had a choice to pick it or have my teacher pick it I would pick it my self any day of the week. If I would was to choose my own summer project then I am almost 100% sure most kids would like to pick their own summer project. Just like 2 summers ago I had to go to summer school because I was not doing so good in my cases and the teacher said that all we had to do was a project and we would be all good and we will be ok to go to the next grade so I was relived so I went home and got started on it but when I got started I realized that it was boring and if something was boring I was probaly not going to get it done. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81a7857164de,F776F9881474,I think that if schols make kids do summer projects they should be able to pick what they are going to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3390cea9651a,F776F9881474,it will be more fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cc0ffa6b763,F776F9881474,it gives a chance for kids to think on their own. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f79bee648d18,F7D1D884AAD4,The Seagoing Cowboys program is fantastic because you get to do a lot of things. This is a once and a lifetime opportunity. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+dbcbfb6cfa12,F7D1D884AAD4,Trust me you'll want to join ,Position,Adequate,,,
+684c68931d56,F7D1D884AAD4,you get to see the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+254537fe3edb,F7D1D884AAD4,"you go travel on the boat ride home and back but, you don't have to go sit around and watch from the boat. When you get off the boat you have a reward. If you like to see stuff like Europe, Italy, China, Greece then you'll love it. If you don't believe me ask Luke he's the one whos been to all those places. He said that the boat trips were so unbelievable for a small town boy like him. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+495432ba1cd9,F7D1D884AAD4,you will get to help people outside of your community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+056d1e4f3a4b,F7D1D884AAD4,"Like bring them food, water, and animals. It all ways feels good to help people in your own way. But it really effects peoples lives in the way you can help them. And it really doesn't take much to help those people. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0c89773b58f,F7D1D884AAD4,your not alone on this trip if you want company ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ccf3484814e,F7D1D884AAD4,"You can make friends on the way like Luke did because after you give the animals to the people who need help there is room for things like Volleyball, Baseball, Table-tennis, Fencing, Boxing, Reading, and Whittling. These are all good things to pass the time after some hard work has been done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+519ace2739db,F7D1D884AAD4,"So if you like to travel, help people, make friends and more then the Seagoing Cowboys program is for you and if noy maybe trying to recommend it to one of your friends who might like because I know Luke did.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+763718dde769,F7F9EB5D0F2D,"The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents in the article ""The Challenge Of Exploring Venus"" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e5bfa25c626b,F7F9EB5D0F2D,The author presents this idea as the main idea of the passage because Venus is sometimes called the evening star. This point is the one of the brightest in the night sky this makes even easy to spot for amateur stargazers to spot. This statement is misleading because it is actually a part of our solar system second planet from our sun. This star is great from a distance but it is a very meaningful cloud draped world. This planet may be bright we have sent many human organized spacecrafts never survived more than a few hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb47a8ac3ffa,F7F9EB5D0F2D,This gives a Venus a good persuit but it dangerous. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dea1ca76cd89,F7F9EB5D0F2D,The reason for this danger inspite a good discovery is the thick atmosphere filled with 97% Carbon Dioxide blankets the most part of Venus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c10cacfb130e,F7F9EB5D0F2D,Clouds of sulfaric acid in the atmosphere which is highly corrosive. The author creates a great danger of being on this planet by giving us details on what is highly destructive in the planets atmosphere. Studying in Venus may be worth it for the data but very destructive and harmful to the human culture/nature. This creative image in my mind is giving me a wild estimate of how it is like to be on the planet Venus. The creation of Venus may be from the atmosphere crosion and that is why it is so important people from th human to participate in the visit of Venus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ea089cc3ea5,F7F9EB5D0F2D,I would say the conclusion of this article is the image that the author creates in my mind of the worthy persuit also the destruction it could cause because of the corrosive atmosphere. The author supports the main idea really well with the content and details in this article. He makes it really interesting to create an image so horrible but make it were you beleive that the human race should want to go there. This article explains and gives ideas that tell you that you would want to risk your life there but also it would be hard to go there because of all the critical things that are on Venus. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+089d529616a1,F84A7FCFEF76,The author supports his or her evidence by giving us what Venus is like before astronauts try to explore Venus. They give a brief paragraphs of what Venus is like and the last time NASA to explore Venus. Venus is a hard planet to go even though it right behind the sun. Human being can probably not handle the preasure that is on Venus so it can be dangerous ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+90d7991e45c9,F84A7FCFEF76,"Venus can be a good planet to discver in the article it mentions that we us has human beings, havent touch the surface of Venus. The author also gives us the similarites that Venus had before Earth was around. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+666f47ee8fbb,F84A7FCFEF76,"NASA has explored the moon and that's how far we have been and we never wen't farther than that. It's good to learn about Venus and it's ways and were it is located in our solar system but trying to put a human being on planet that has servre weather, temperatrue changes, and not the right oxygen can be very dangerous. Despiteing danger can be bad because that person will ony focus on the good things they heard about that planet and what it was like. They never focus on what the danger part of going on a such a dangerous trip. NASA should could do more reasearch on Venus before they go anywhere. It cool to strive for a new challlenge in Earth historty, but if this mission was succesful trip people will only focuse they would'nt focus on the flashbacks of putting other people that have families life on the and the have chance of dieing on g this jounrney to Venus.       ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80465bfeeb2d,F86C71E10A78,"So, you have read the article Unmasking the Face on Mars, am i right? Well, I have some theories of my own ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d31da6d8e310,F86C71E10A78,"I can assure you that Cydonia on mars, is not a face or anything extra-terrestrial. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d94c35b239be,F86C71E10A78,"My first reason as to why Cydonia on mars isnt a face is, well have you ever looked at the moon? Ever notice that when the moon if full, you see a face? Scientists in the past have been to the moon on investigations. While they were there they have proven that the face on the moon was just a bunch of craters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57251ceaced7,F86C71E10A78,"It is most likely that the face on mars is just creaters, or a mesa too. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e203779f0303,F86C71E10A78,"My second reason is, things in outer space pictures are going to be a lot bigger than in reality. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aff03ee7206e,F86C71E10A78,"Take the sun for an example, we see the sun ten times smaller than it really is. If the sun was just as small as we presume it is, then how would planets, that are thousands of light years away, possibly get warm? 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b749e630df60,F86C71E10A78,"The final picture they took on April 5,1998, actually showed the Martain equivalent of a buttle or mesa. Buttles and mesas are landforms common around the American west. ""It reminds me most of Middle Buttle in the Snake River Plain of Idaho"" says Garvin. ""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa, about the same hieght as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1389cfccd37,F86C71E10A78,"The Snake River in Idaho is basically evidence that Cydonia isnt really a face and that is was just a buttle, or mesa. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+478e7b4866e6,F86C71E10A78,"My third and final reason is, that all planets start off as a big ball of rock, meteors, and astroids that collide with each other. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3582b5436b47,F86C71E10A78,"The possiblities of a ball of rock, a planet, having left over craters from all of the collisions, is very high. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cdd854adca50,F86C71E10A78,"If, somewhere way far out in space, or even just one planet away, wouldn't we have had a lot more pictures, videos, and newspaper articles about aliens? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4196a079ca10,F86C71E10A78,"This is only three theories backed with evidence, and I'm sure that if you talk to any other of these wonderful scientists at NASA, that they can also provide more reasons with more evidence. Thus, I really hope that these reasons help you clearify that Cydonia is not a sign of Extra-Terrestrial activity. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+46bd72aa811d,F86F94DCEB33,i for one most defanitly think that an atomatic face reconation system it a amazing idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cf1ac3ff6be1,F86F94DCEB33,the idea that the kid well be able to be more envoleved with there way of larning. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+555e377b5d10,F86F94DCEB33,"we all now that children and adults both have things that there just better at. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8d29eb364e0,F86F94DCEB33,"dont u think beignable to have your scholl education chagne and be for what u can exsell in, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bff10853c867,F86F94DCEB33,if not that than at lest being able to change it up a lil bit to keep every kid on trck and eger to learn more. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5beede8303ca,F86F94DCEB33,this comuter programe could help so many people be and do the best thay can at what they love. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f7f321d6fcd4,F86F94DCEB33,"to start this kind of teaching now would most liky be a very costly proseger, but defanitly be worth evey last panny for the new breed of student, born of respect and hunger for the knowlege at hand. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2270485107d1,F880CDD90C95,Have you ever felt the rush of winning first place or crossing the finish line? Have you ever been so determined you feel like your body will explode? Doing an extracurricular activity gives kids the privilege to have a hobby and feel good about themelves. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+cd9c89ddc85f,F880CDD90C95,"I agree with the decision, and believe that all students should participate in an out-of-school activity ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f84bc9d77441,F880CDD90C95,"because it makes kids happier, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ca988a55390b,F880CDD90C95,"they meet new people, make new friends, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4b8ad71a6129,F880CDD90C95,"learn important skills along the way, that can be crucial for future situatons. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a7f2142d827e,F880CDD90C95,"It has been scientifically proven, that doing an activity outside of school has made students happier than the kids that sit around or barry themselves in piles of schoolwork. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+adbf4f030f9b,F880CDD90C95,"There was a study at Oxford University a few years ago, back in 2016. They examined the affect of fifty college students attitudes and mood throughout one month, with twenty-five of them doing an activity unrelated to school, and the other twenty-five who didn't participate in an extracurricular activity. After a month of research and testing, the professors at the univerisity got their results. It was proven that the students that did do something unrelated to schoolwork, were much happier, had higher levels of dopamine, good grades, and were able to fuction through their daily lives with barely any obstacles or problems. However, the students that didn't participate in anything had lower levels of dopamine and were a lot more stressed out. Then, because of this, their grades were affected drastically. Doing an activity like track or joining a club would be better for a students mental health. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+111301150d87,F880CDD90C95,"An extracurricular doesn't just make kids happier, students can meet a lot of people and make new friends.
+
+Doing an extracurricular activity will help people branch out, meet new people, and make new friends, possibly some important ones ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0209937d61de,F880CDD90C95,"Three years ago, I joined an organization called ""Girls on the Run."" They focused on running, races, and track. Then, at the end of the year, we would participate in a race called a 5K, which is a three mile run. At first, I was insanely nervous. My body would shake, and I would sweat dramatically. The other people that joined used to be a bunch of people I had never met or talked to before, but in the long run, I made great memories with them. All of us became very close, to the point where we were almost inseperable, and did everything together. All of us are still friends to this day, and hope to be for years to come. Doing an extracurricular gives kids a chance to branch out in their community, and make great friends along the way, that'll possibly stick beside them for a lifetime. Then, since an activity gives students a chance to branch out, they could learn very important life skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f11ee7f08675,F880CDD90C95,"Participating in an extracurricular gives kids a chance to branch out, and also learn very important skills that'll help them in the future. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+65830d00ea97,F880CDD90C95,"My mom did Science Olympiad when she was younger, and was able to get to the national championship one year. Sadly, another team beat them, but my mom learned something very important that day. She learned that it was okay to loose, and how to accept that it will happen again in the future. Ever since then, when she lost something, she accepted it, and wasn't upset. My friend Generic_Name, from elementary school used to do track with me, but moved onto another sport. She was unbareably talented, and was as fast as a cheetah. When she won her first championship, she learned how to be humble, and learned not to think that she was better than anyone else on our team just because she won the championship. She didn't just do that though, she was able to encourage other people on the team to be humble as well, and not to brag if you did really good on something. In later situations, she knew not to brag or boast about the fact that she did better than someone else. Doing an activity helps people be better, and could help the students of the school be better as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97873ed29db3,F880CDD90C95,"Doing an activity outside of school would help the students be better people, and help them collect better personality traits. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+781497c4d821,F880CDD90C95,"They'll become happier and less stressed out from other things going on, like problems with family or schoolwork, which will have a positive affect on their grades, family life, and social life. This, can lead to even more success in the future. Lastly, they can create lifelong friends, and meet more people which can help them get how used to introducing themselves to other people, and get used to the situation. This is another important skill for the future that is taught by an extracurricular. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a7b9405ba0b,F880CDD90C95,"doing an extracurriular will make the students of our beloved school happier, make new friends, and learn important skills to become better people for the future.                ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d3f87b5637f6,F881AA0F9990,It is an innovative idea from may people to cut down on the use of a motor vehicle ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9fdf09f0cbfc,F881AA0F9990,in these passages it gives pros on the better enviormental way of living. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b0f6be46efe3,F881AA0F9990,"The first source talks about a city that is in Germany called Vauban, where residents have accepted the challenge of no car usage. The city is designed for walking to department stores, grocery stores, ect. But this so what utopia is not all a utopia itself, where 30 percent of families own cars. Also the United States Enviornmental Proctection Agency is promoting ""car reduced"" communities like Vauban ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50f085327bcd,F881AA0F9990,This action to have a car reduced communites was because of the damage done by cars on the enviornment by pollution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+213c33795587,F881AA0F9990,"In the last source, it tells about how car culture is ending slowly. In the United States pople have been ""buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by."" A study shows that driving by young people has decreased by 23 percent from 2001 and 2009. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f3675da29f0,F881AA0F9990,all these sources have explained that a non motorized vehicle is for the best in our health and in our enviornment. it is a new and innovatied way that is being accepted by a numerous amount of the population.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d004b35f28d4,F8C22ACD1774,"Swimming in the ocean, getting a tan, boating, and fishing are all exciting activities for the summer; in contrast, a school project is not, especially one without clear instructions.
+
+A school project that is completely student-designed is unfathomable for many Elementary, Middle, or High School students because of the stress it would create during a time of recovery.
+
+Many teachers give summer assignments, but allow for students to do the work, that was required to be completed over the summer, during the school year.
+
+Although projects with specific instructions by the teacher can be tedious, many could argue that coming up with a rubric for ones self would be of greater difficulty.
+
+In the event that schools make summer projects mandatory, it is the responsibility of teachers to make sure students learn necessary information and achieve the goals of the project. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+eeefd2bbfc19,F8C22ACD1774,Teachers should design the summer project for students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+280796814dee,F8C22ACD1774,"no teacher wants to grade abstract projects and no student wants to strive for individuality when out of contact with classmates, for when students are on summer break many do not have the ability so see if they are doing the same project, accidentally, as others. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94e7466129b3,F8C22ACD1774,"A psychology teacher conducts a final exam each year in the form of a project in which students choose a topic and are not given instructions besides to relate it to psychology; consequently, she has found this project to be a hassle more than an excitement for both her and some of her students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dfde3cb75dbe,F8C22ACD1774,"The process of completing a project goes smoother when given rules to follow and, within those rules, allowing students to express themselves even more than that of a guideline-free project. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f9a4de5139d5,F8C22ACD1774,When completing homework or classwork in which students must research to learn what the next unit will entail allows students a chance to learn more than what is required and provides students the ability to learn even before the information is taught. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9f8e66510b25,F8C22ACD1774,"Many students would jump at the opportunity to get ahead on the information for the next school year and many may not enjoy the requirement, but appreciate the opportunity.
+
+Giving clear instructions provides the structure to learn and get ahead before the race for grades begins.
+
+A summer project in which the students are designing and planning does not insure they will continue to learn during their break, but instead assures teachers that students will attempt to make it as non complex and superficial for themselves as possible.
+
+Providing students with the opportunity to design their project uniquely with no specifications needed enables them to be lazy in the creation of the project and miss critical information for the subject that the project is on.
+
+Students come up with many ways to avoid in depth descriptions of a topic because of the lack of motivation to do so.
+
+With clear instructions, students will be able to find the information the teacher wants and needs in order to grade the project, and the information needed to elaborate on this knowledge in the beginning of the school year.
+
+Students want the ability to enjoy the summer and with the specific necessities for the summer project highlighted, they will not have the stress of creating a project from scratch. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a4f1f13e676,F8C22ACD1774,"Many people have found student-designed projects to be more time consuming, although less tedious, and will overall take away from the main purpose of summer vacation which is to recover from the stress induced during the school year. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a980ca6843f9,F8C22ACD1774,"It takes time to plan a student-designed project and many are not given the time needed because of family vacations and summer jobs to account for.
+
+Summer assignments are difficult to complete no matter the type, but an all-encompassing, nonspecific project would be found a stressor many would not wish to endure. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+134f913391ef,F8C22ACD1774,"summer is a time for rejuvenation and recuperation; therefore, requiring an abstract project during this time is inadequate to the idea that many students are unable to complete such a task based on prior engagements, no structural support to aid in finding information needed, and upholding the sole purpose of summer.
+
+Students do not want the stress of the school year carried over into the summer and neither do teachers, for students may find the need to contact teachers about what they can and cannot do if there is not a rubric they are able to follow. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+46e4107ae033,F91D7BB4277C,If we limit our car usage throughout the year we can cut the rate of carbon dioxiod we produce by 1/2 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+65c03a5f47b6,F91D7BB4277C,"That will save uor trees, animals, and even our own lifes in the future. Also the ablity to save as many fossil fuels we have remaining cause everyone knows we are starting to run completly out and can not creat any more ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+200cfc174be5,F91D7BB4277C,we save time and energy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a96e2073d399,F91D7BB4277C,creat a healthy envirnment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2405f2141cc,F91D7BB4277C,If we slowly progress the fact that we are only using our automobiles 345/360 days a year will cut back our usage for fossile fuels by 15%. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56744a66949a,F91D7BB4277C,"This whole thing is point less how they have us in here for two days im missing my education. We could have finished this in one day and had the rest of the week to get back on the track of learning. I've missed both days of weight lifting, algebra, and my world history that i do not want to fail again! If their are any people actually gonna sit down and take the time to read this then
+
+DO NOT DO THIS NEXT YEAR
+
+.
+
+They are giving us cold lunches. ham and cheese and an apple, I am 16 years old and my body needs proper food. I wouldnt be complaining if they served actual breakfast. but because of Michelle Obama and her healthy diet rule they surve us 1 poptart in the moring. How does the school board expect us to last from 7:05-12:15 on a pop tart? then expect us to get A's, we are more focused on lunch than anything else. I am about done so if you have the time to read this even though this does not count. Bring PROPER_NAME a big Mac from mc donalds, SCHOOL_NAME, (idk area code but its in florida)            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1db28914d8ad,F9238D9E5631,Summer projects often receive mixed opinions among students and teachers alike. There is an ongoing debate on whether these summer projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e16b62c0acdc,F9238D9E5631,"Those who disagree may state that summer projects should be teacher-designed because it leads to more efficiency and ensures the project follows specific required guidelines, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+635a33147a38,F9238D9E5631,it should be known that student-designed summer projects would be better. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eec4cd0498b2,F9238D9E5631,Student-designed projects allow students to better apply themselves. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+915e5120f98a,F9238D9E5631,"students would be practicing for a future of independence, where they would be the main person dictating what their work should reflect. Students would have to practice planning ahead to ensure their work reflects their full potential, rather than rushing into work and creating something sub par. Another positive related to student-planned projects is that students would be more prepared for future experiences. Students would have an opportunity to lightly touch on skills required throughout adulthood and outside of school. They would be practicing time management as they plan for their project within their own schedule. Students would also be practicing self-reliance as their project would be fully based on their own efforts. Further, a student-designed project would reflect the student by what work they present. By choosing what they create, the student's the effort and energy put into the project would be represented in their work. It also shows their own work ethic, as the quality of the project would highlight how much they valued completing the project in a well-reflected manner. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec8c68a9a2ce,F9238D9E5631,Student-designed projects can lead to work created in better quality than projects that are teacher-designed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6dd6c3813d2,F9238D9E5631,"student-designed projects allow students to express their own creativity as they control the major factors that play into what makes up the project. Students would be choosing their own work, allowing them to more blatantly show their own ability through more preffered methods.
+
+To extend on this, students would create better designed projects as they wouldn't feel pressured to follow an exact guideline to receive a high-scoring grade. Student-designed projects would allow more room for students to seek different opportunities to express themselves through their work. The lack of pressure could also mean the project would be overall more enjoyable for the student to complete, as it would be based off their own ideas and planning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b5ced098028,F9238D9E5631,"a student-designed project would mean more reflection over one's own work, as the basis of the project would be in their own hands. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4a45fefbc59,F9238D9E5631,"The added control would result in more unique work from each student, encouraging students to complete their own work as many variables of the project would already be based on their own ideas. Student-designed projects would mean self-evaluation of one's own work, allowing the student to decide for theirself if their work is up to standards based on their own ability, rather than an exact outline that may feel like a barrier. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7bc8a2c79792,F9238D9E5631,"Although some may state that it is better for teachers to design summer projects, it is actually better for these projects to be student-designed. This is the case due to students being more creative, effective, and independent in their own work as they control the factors that make up their project. Those who believe it is better for teachers to design summer projects may state that set guidelines ensure the project is done efficiently and makes sure that it is done right, but this is not true. This is an ongoing debate due to these projects being one of the major sources of academic stimulation for many students during the summer, which leads back to the idea that students should design their own summer projects as it would add many individual benefits during this time period. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3d43fd39cc3d,F92664C55FBB,Should you be able to text and drive? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+94401798d988,F92664C55FBB,"Your friend is driving you home from a party. It was the best time of your life. You feel drowsy, not able to think straight. You notice your friend is texting while driving. You come to your senses and ask if he can pull over, he declines. You black out, what feels like a couple of minutes later you wake up and notice you were in a coma. You ask where your friend is and he's been dead for 2 years. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e33bb1dec07,F92664C55FBB,This all could have been prevented if he just put his phone down and took you home safe and sound. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28596ab13604,F92664C55FBB,"In 2018 deaths related to cell phone use in cars accidents was 4,637 in the U.S alone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e932376b5276,F9368F6BAB62,You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c8bcdf839822,F9368F6BAB62,"This program is where people like me help rcover other countries with their food supplies, animals, and more. 44 nations joined together to form the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration (UNRRA). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f62fbdda3df0,F9368F6BAB62,"When I was frist asked I know that I couldn't say no. I belive that the cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy. I got to see Europe and China. To me seeing the Acropolis in Greece. Also in Venice, Itily. The streets were water! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33b59a6d9c18,F9368F6BAB62,Caring for the animals while crossing the oceans kept me busy. I had to feed and water them three times a day. I also had to claen out the stalls. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1b58df030b6,F9368F6BAB62,Once I served as night watchman. i had to check on the animals every hour. Once I slid down a slipery lader and almost fell overbord. I was cought by an pice of metal. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8b7be32f2d1,F9368F6BAB62,Even though being in the UNRRA could be dangours it is all woth it. It could also be a lot of work ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0c7bbb875792,F9368F6BAB62,But when you get to see abunch of special stuff it is like all of the hard and dangours worck wasn't even that hard. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f85d5cf47740,F9448F4CD1E8,"Cars are most the most used machine for transportation in modern day. Cars help us travel places faster then bikes, walking, running, etc. But did you know that cars are also helpful for spewing toxic chemicals in the air. People are unaware that the cars are destroying the oxygen that we have here on earth and produce oxygen into smog. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+44b96c50bbf2,F9448F4CD1E8,To reduce the pollution of the chemicals that cars make is to simply show citizens the advantages of limiting car usages. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+91154171d31b,F9448F4CD1E8,"From the sources that I have gathered and used for data is that one of my sources said in its article that stated ""After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e35c487abf6a,F9448F4CD1E8,Paris is banning people for using any automobiles beacuse the pollution is over the limit of what it needs to be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3d86dcc3227,F9448F4CD1E8,"From the source ""In German suburbs, Life Goes On Without Cars"" the article stated that ""Increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities.""
+
+The private cars that are increasing with numbers and chemicals are are owned by the middle class people that leave nothing but pollution in their cities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+544cb3278a34,F9448F4CD1E8,The people in the middle class are more exsposed to smog and they need to use less of the private cars in order to reduce pollution in the cities  also need to reduce the amount of cars on their street and increase the amount of passengers in their cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d79725d4c547,F9448F4CD1E8,"Another reason for limiting the car usage is "" united stat and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3ecd7750243,F9448F4CD1E8,they are stating that they dont need cars to go where the need to go because they can use other things. They also are saying that they're not contributing toward the pollution. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e4e08a77b82c,F9448F4CD1E8,"to people limiting their car usage is that it helps the earths atmosphere it can also destroy your oxygen supply, but it can get you places faster than any other mobile. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fb3a51331a01,F955CADBB6B4,Summer projects should be teacher designed and not student designed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ee479bcdc83,F955CADBB6B4,"When designing a project over the summer, a teacher's design will be more structured, with a clear goal for the overall project.  ",Claim,Effective,,,
+55b39c37ae4f,F955CADBB6B4,"with teacher's knowing what skills and materiel students need to learn, they will be able to design a proper and well throughout project that will keep the students on their feet. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+01b8beff9443,F955CADBB6B4,"when it comes to summer, the last thing on a students mind is school based learning. So, lots of students will either procrastinate or create a poorly designed project leading to no continuation of learning over the break ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f4105cf2d92f,F955CADBB6B4,"A teacher is someone who has learned the ins and outs of school based learning, who went to college and received a teaching degree, and has a specialized learning in usually one or more subjects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fd6b170210bb,F955CADBB6B4,"Summer for students resembles a break from school. Whether that means traveling to the Bahamas or staying home, a student does not want even the slightest thought of school in their mind. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b726d0fddafa,F955CADBB6B4,"Some might say that student-designed projects allow a more personalized and creative component. Additionally, students will be able to design a project they enjoy learning. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c9e6353f5ca7,F955CADBB6B4,"This is true, but not just for student designed projects. Like students, teachers can design different types or styles of projects allowing all types of learning for the student. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2354eb52bd00,F955CADBB6B4,"For example, a teacher can design a project for mechanical engineering, biology, political sciences, Algebra 2, or more, allowing multiple choices for the student to choose. Also no matter what project design a student receives, the topics will be broad, giving space for creative thinking. The teacher-designed projects won't just give students space for creative opportunities but also flexibility with their decision. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de380dc18c8e,F955CADBB6B4,"When it comes to summer projects, teachers should be the ones designing them. They are specialist in learning and know what further steps students need to take to learn. With the teachers clear design instructions and guidance, it will make summer learning much easier and efficient. Teacher designed projects aren't just helpful for students but teachers as well. When grading or examining the projects, that they designed, it will be easier for them to grade and compare to other students. So when in comes to whether summer projects should be either student-designed or teacher designed, teacher-designed is the way to go and will assure a continuation of learning during the summer break. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bcbd9f66b05b,F955CE7D650C,"Just as crisp Autumn air rolling just around the corner and summer is coming to a bitter sweet ending. Then OH NO!
+
+You completely forgot about that pesky summer assignment your teacher gave you. You were supposed to read one book every week and write an analysis. This is what its like for every student young or old when given a summer assignment. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+70fe40658443,F955CE7D650C,summer projects and assignments should be student designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac76deec5a4b,F955CE7D650C,it gives students the opportunity to create something they will enjoy ,Claim,Effective,,,
+78ac2f264831,F955CE7D650C,"held accountable for as well as giving teachers a break. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+8ed8c340634e,F955CE7D650C,The projects given to students over the summer are nine times out of ten busy work. A very large assignment most of the time having to do with reading and then writing about how you feel about that particular topic assigned. When a student is given busy work there is no real learning happening. If students create their own projects this very issue can be avoided as they can change and adapt their project so they are genuinely learning. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+882e5095742b,F955CE7D650C,"Students know how much work they are able to do as well as the skill level required for their project. When students create their own projects its always going to be able something they enjoy, making it easier for them to do the project and be held accountable for it. Students are also able to create their own project knowing they are being graded not on the standard for everyone else but the standard for themselves. This takes a lot of pressure off of students as they feel like they will be graded fairly as long as long as they do as much as they are capable of doing and do it well. If the student does not complete the project for whatever reason it is much easier for them to be held accountable for it, as excuses like ""I didnt understand"" or ""It was to hard for me"" will become invalid because they are the ones who create the project. Thus making it clear that student designed projects will benefit everyone and insure work is being down. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a1660370abe3,F955CE7D650C,Some people who believe that teachers should design summer project may argue that because they are the ones that create student assignments and projects for students on a day to day basis they would be able to create a project more efficiently in comparison to a student. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6d3954aa4b2f,F955CE7D650C,Although what people with these beliefs fail to realize is that teachers are humans too and they get tired. Teachers wait for the summer to come just as much as students and to have them create an entirely new project towards the end of the year can be very tiring after having a year full of creating assignments. When the students create their own summer project it allows for teachers to be able to relax and take some weight off their shoulders as the day until summer slowing come. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6c141e4d497e,F955CE7D650C,Another argument that could be made as to why teachers should make summer projects is that teachers will create projects tailored for the student as they work with them the whole year ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+03107c67ca63,F955CE7D650C,"but this is in fact wrong. Teachers are one person and are not able to create strong bonds with every students they come across. Typically the project given is one standard made to fit everyone but thats not possible as everyone is not the same. This is why students should be allowed to create their own summer projects. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+744aef1de877,F955CE7D650C,All in all student should be given the opportunity to create their own summer projects. This because students will create something they enjoy and will do. It will also give teachers with one less project to make. After all why take the hard way when allowing the students to design the project themselves can be just efficient with less work for both students and teachers. That is exactly why students should be allowed to create their own summer projects. At the end of the day everyone just wants to enjoy their summer the best way possible.  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+dac28bdaa3e3,F986BF53A8AD,"In A COWBOY WHO RODE THE WAVE there was a boy named Luke, he was invited to go to a ones in a lifetime opportunity .He was invited by his friend Don Reist to go on the trip. they were going to go on a cattle boat ,and help the mules,horses,and young cow. On the trip they would cross the big seas.
+
+In the story it says they where called to go to New Orleans on august 1945 and arrived on august,14 right before the war ended. When they got thier seaman papers they were sent to go on the SS Charles W.Woosterand. They headed to greece with a load of 335 horses and enough food to keep the horses alive. Ones luke was discharged from the trips he already made 9 journeys threw the sea. In the story it says that luke was the most segoing cowboy.
+
+On his many trips he also saw many places like Europe,China,but luke thought the most speacial one was when he saw the Acropolis in Greece. The whole story was about the adventure of a lifetime that he got to go on. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b74a512a705c,F988DE4C8A4F,"when you drive on the road and all of sudden you see a yard sale or a car for sale or anything your thinking first well let me just stop and park on the side of the road. well one thing is one you might ge ticket or in genral areas its just frobiden, but your thinking what can i do?,well when you get yuor first car maybe your thinking i can drive however i want and also where i want then on other hand you just dont care, break the rules. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3743380ce5a1,F988DE4C8A4F,"in some countrys or states or anywhere in the united states some counrtys ban from alot of things when you drive. for example Paris bans driving due to smog,also if leave you car in the way of the road you fine anywhere you go in life, so you have to think before drive or do other things while your driving. Citizens use diesel fuel when they drive, some people have to,for example france they have tax policy on diesel over gasoline ,but the most percent that citizens use is diesel engines. citizens changes of different usage of things between gas and companies, but they have avantages for them and to make the better so it can be used. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+610ae8566357,F988DE4C8A4F,"Their is  place called Bogota and there they have a car free day, but has beed the third year they have been banned with buses and taxis permitted for a day without a car. to begin with alot of places have banned without cars but some have not, for example to banned without a car would not be good because if have a car and cant drive it because the city is banned or the country is banned from then the bus abnd taxi and everything else is banned then your permmtted withour a car to drive,ride. people come Bogota come to see how enthusiastic they have been ,now they improvement without cars,which sounds good becasuse the mayor improving something new for them or just changing things around. now new things are starting to come in sidewalks are being replaced,they have cut traffic, new restaurants,so with everything improving then maybe cars wont banned no more restriced things maybe everything might be limting to what the mayor is saying. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b3164776c8b,F988DE4C8A4F,"Now that president Obama has been seeing whats been going on about the banning of the cars and no limiting usage, things are now starting even more with the president in the advantage,now the question is that their asking is ''has America passed peak driving"" to me on ther hand it has, becasue all the commtions between things being banned and they see the usage of things, but now everything is starting to change. now people are starting to get what is their back now the ownership of their house and their payments of everything is going down. to conclude, all of the study from last year about the driving of young people has decreased by so much percent ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84387a7682d2,F988DE4C8A4F,"now since everything is back to normal then things don't have to be bannned alot anymore so if they can keep the percentage down then evrything is good, if it does go down they can get usage, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3abf8b923b81,F98E8D4EA700,The advantages of limiting car usage is ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fb68f79779db,F98E8D4EA700,"they have less greenhouse gas emissions, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdd20a54b3df,F98E8D4EA700,being less tense ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0bd49f8d13a,F98E8D4EA700,more accessible to public transportation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2582c728708e,F98E8D4EA700,the air is more dense and is a huge impediment to currrent efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fa742ab432c4,F98E8D4EA700,Also another advantage is being less tense ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5883b77dc9a1,F98E8D4EA700,"a good thing about being less tense in can reduce high blood pressure, lesser chance for heart attack for people 40 or older, and you won't be so stressed because stress is a main cause for heart attacks and high blood pressure. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87c26cec7bd9,F98E8D4EA700,being more accessible to public transportation is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c69a625ec19,F98E8D4EA700,"its just like carpooling everyone can ride in one vehicle and use less gas to make the air more dense and clear so the less gas you can use the better the air will be more clear so everyone can breathe in clean air for their lungs but if you don't like to use public transportation use you can always walk, jog, or even run because it's a great way to excersize your muscles.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46a6dc81a3a0,F9B111EB508A,Fellow citizens need to be informed that the advantages of limiting car use could help promote better living and hope?fully a longer life span of this planet ,Position,Adequate,,,
+37416f77e343,F9B111EB508A,"All Americans do is drive everywhere,they never think about how driving effects the air and the temperature of this planet. Maybe we can be like Africa and have nothing at all. Or just maybe appreciate that we actually have something. Why would we ever get rid of cars? I do not know,but i do know that getting rid of cars is really stupid. Well as i was asked im now going to explain to you how getting rid of cars is ""good"". 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4866269a568d,F9B111EB508A,One reason why getting rid of cars could be good is that you wont have to really worry about the greenhouse gases that are emmited by the exhaust pipes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e508df2dfbbf,F9B111EB508A,"Your air will be as clean as a whistle. The only thing bad about that is that those gases actually keep some places warm,but to other people it justs ""melts the ice caps."". 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96c2ed5245e1,F9B111EB508A,Another reason why getting rid of cars is good is that there will be less traffic and fewer accidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+387a80d922c8,F9B111EB508A,"So you'll get to work a little bit later than usual but you'll get there safe. You wont have to worry about about spending thousands of dollars every time you need a new ride,just a couple of hundreds. People rarely get their licences anyways so it doesnt really matter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6cbae9e76fe,F9B111EB508A,"As you can see,getting rid of cars would be very beneficial to our society. Our air will be cleaner,streets will be safer and best of all,we'll have more money to spend.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+30204e38dd75,F9E6665D7693,"Have you ever looked at someone and you wasnt sure what thier emotion was? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+523fe6d5e7a8,F9E6665D7693,i think what Nick did was amazing making a facial coding system to tell what thier feeling. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8816acf8fb4e,F9E6665D7693,This article is very valuble i believe because this is something serious yo me you could say your happy but you really won't be but with the system anybody could know your real and true feelings. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+902499163900000,F9E6665D7693,i get why some people dont tell their real feelings because they might not want them to see them down. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+938535957510,F9E6665D7693,i can gret that but at the same time you could get help anything can happen to you while your down and it could be really helpful or maybe go to a consoulor to talk to or anything. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f49f89369761,F9E6665D7693,if people would just try it out they might enojy and like it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+449b54a7837e,F9E6665D7693,but i know most of them well not enjoy or like it at all. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+36a2efc08482,F9E6665D7693,it well also tell all your emotions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1133b3d075ef,F9E6665D7693,"for explain in the artclle it said ""she's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearfu; , and 2 percent angry""
+
+then Nick tells us how it works "" the process begins with a computer constructs a 3-d computer model of the face all 44 major muscles in a model must move likle human muscles.""     ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6be128fcc0da,F9FFECDE9A53,"In the article ""Making Mona Lisa Smile,"" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify humans emotions to see humans' reactions while they are using their computers. Computers can recognize emotions by the way you look, and it is allow to the computers to understand your feelings, and to change the topic because they used this technology to see Mona Lisa's emotions. ""The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model on the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles."" When technology developed they started their project with a 3-D computer. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8cb2a4e8a2aa,F9FFECDE9A53,"A claim for the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions are that the computer can detected the emotions of the student because it has a ""Web ad appears"" on the screen of the student's computer, and it can see his/her different emotions by the way their faces are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a33e95dc44f,F9FFECDE9A53,"According to the text in paragraph 6 Dr. Huang explains how the computer might work if the student doesn't like what he/she has in the computer and it says ""A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c03da989fc49,F9FFECDE9A53,The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39327edf59bb,F9FFECDE9A53,"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers can understand that, too."" It means that technology has developed, Dr. Paul Eckman and Dr. Huang created the FACS to see humans emotions, it has six basic as: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. The Doctors are showing that the new computers can see what it is in your mind because they improved the technology. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7297dd4871c0,F9FFECDE9A53,"the ""Facial Action Coding System"" is a good appications for a variety of industries because it is able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they try to hide their emotions. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c9ffe7a1a5ad,F9FFECDE9A53,"The new technology has ""Empathy because it can feels someone else's emotions and can handle the complex algorithms. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdbd7f6a8ca4,FA03BD616C6B,Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7bb4cacaa839,FA03BD616C6B,"because in the article
+
+¨The challange of exloring venus¨ that says that many reaseachers are working on inovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus ans it wont be dangerous ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0575c79a78e0,FA03BD616C6B,i believe that the people who are trying to go to venus or sent something to venus should do it because you never know what other kids of things are out there and if we dont try news things we wont discover new stuff . ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+1da4de3bf23d,FA03BD616C6B,one reason we should try to go is only becuase of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because humans curisoity will likely lead us into many eqaully intimdating endeavors ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dbc7f74eaa28,FA03BD616C6B,and if they have doubt that their nort going to make well the new inovations that wont hurt us and it will now longer be dangerous . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8ab98dc0c0fc,FA130E0C813E,"Yes, I believe that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit also ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fb08beaa1795,FA130E0C813E,"In paragraph 4, it states ""astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar sytem."" It was once covered with large oceans. Venus has features such as valleys, mountains, and craters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da68efa76871,FA130E0C813E,If Earth was to end Venus would possibly be our best choice to go to. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+311773ef8089,FA130E0C813E,"Venus is referred to as Earth's ""twin."" Venus has the density and size closest to Earth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e5455df8e1b,FA130E0C813E,"In paragraph 8, is states "" Venus has value."" Only because the insight we have so far on Venus is unbelievable. Studying more on this planet may lead us to many equally intimidating endeavors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+685ababaca72,FA130E0C813E,"There are also many more things we need to study about Venus, that may not be so safe. Venus is the second planet to our sun, which may be too hot for humans to be on. This planet is a very challenging place to examine ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+524968757c34,FA130E0C813E,"Each mission that was sent to Venus no spacecraft has survived more than a few hours. In paragraph 2, it states ""not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" Not one person have been missioned to go to Venus for those reasons.
+
+In paragraph 3, it states ""temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit."" Also in paragraph 3, is saids ""the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."" These issues are way too dangerous for humans to be on. Solar power could be plentiful but the raditation would not exceed Earth levels. This may still be survival for humans.
+
+In paragraph 6, it states ""researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance."" Like I have said no human has been on Venus because they will die right away ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae1b1384e336,FA130E0C813E,"But, they believe they can make a machince that last long enough to live to take those samples. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4bbd97fc5bb9,FA130E0C813E,"They would have to make that machine with mechanical parts so that it can be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. In paragraph 8, it states "" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc6941cdffef,FA130E0C813E,I believe they will and can studying farther than they have in the past years. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e33ec697757f,FA15A1E3BF2C,"Variouse forms of life, just like earth today, venus has some simliar stuff like earth it has valleys, moutains and craters and scientest think that venus was cover all in water like how earth was million years ago. Venus solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels,not easy condtions but survival for humans. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+116255d292de,FA15A1E3BF2C,"Nasa is also doing still doing studeis today and sending people over there to study the planet to see if the conditons are getting any better or worst so they can studie and any maybe someday the human beigns can live there in another decade once they say the venus is a safe place to visit and live there. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d21236ed56f2,FA15A1E3BF2C,"When you land of venus its dangerous, So people are creating ways that there makigng a ship that will hovering safley around ground condetions that cannot stad the dense of the ground of the atmosphere and rendering phitigraphhy and vidoeography and the most important they cant get smaples on rock,gas or anything else,In that case scientist are seeking to conduct missions on venus.      ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+bf7f585b3965,FA20F1758F03,"Who wouldnt want to have a car? Thats a reason we get from desination A to destination B. Vauban, Germany they are gicing up their cars, like why would you give a object that gets you places faster than walking. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9a785679f1f4,FA20F1758F03,Thats not smart. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0f13c34ea024,FA20F1758F03,"People that had cars have to give their car away in order to live in Germany. Vauban's streets are completely "" car-free"". 70 percent of Vauban's families do not have cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3192393f5461,FA20F1758F03,"Which mean the kids would have to walk everywhere they go, also the parents when you have jobs..what if you dont get to work on time? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5385a2c943a,FA20F1758F03,"Paris enforced a partical driving ban to clear the airr of the global ci ty. If they didnt leave their cars at home they would have been fined for $31.
+
+Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-years of intensifying smog. China is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world . But paris typically has more smog than other European capitals.. Last week paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter .
+
+President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gasemissions, unveiled last week will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in American behavior.
+
+With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting asa result of the recession may find less reasons to resume the habit    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18c54ecf0957,FA2BC6C3A09B,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Many of these summer projects are required for honors classes, such as AP or classes that are in preparation for them. Some think that summer assignments should be designed by teachers. Others think that students would benefit more if it were designed by the students themselves. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5b2d87edaaf5,FA2BC6C3A09B,Summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dda2ee9c755f,FA2BC6C3A09B,"students' lack of motivation, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+988bb25ba050,FA2BC6C3A09B,"students having inadequate knowledge of content, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+21c0aada74dc,FA2BC6C3A09B,the difficulty of coming to agreements. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1e0425f4df5,FA2BC6C3A09B,"They tend to procrastinate a lot, especially during the summer. Students may go on summer vacation or have plans with friends; whatever the reason may be, many do not think of summer assignments as a priority. Teachers also have summer break, which many people tend to forget. If summer assignments were student-designed, teachers would most likely have to do routine progress checks, because of the lack of motivation shown by students. This would be inconvenient for both the teacher and the student. Although summer assignments are not necessarily a main priority, they are still vital for the upcoming school year, especially if a student is taking an honors class. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+93b9975c0fbd,FA2BC6C3A09B,"Direction of content is almost, if not always, provided by the teacher. Teachers plan summer assignments ahead or use ones from previous years; however, they typically do not plan out the syllabus for the upcoming school year before summer break, mainly because it is too early and many adjustments can be made. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7f863586c21e,FA2BC6C3A09B,"It must be taken into consideration that students would have varying opinions, considering what classes they are taking and/or will be; some may think that an assignment is asking for too much, while others may think it is asking for too little. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+46396e972e68,FA2BC6C3A09B,"Although allowing students to create their assignments would most likely be more enjoyable for them, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ca29f44e450c,FA2BC6C3A09B,there is a higher chance it would make them less prepared for the course. Students would struggle to maintain responsibility towards the assignment. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ee1318558876,FA2BC6C3A09B,"As there are many benefits to having student-designed summer assignments, they are less reliable than if the assignment were to be teacher-designed. Teachers have a better understanding of the content, are well-prepared, and can answer questions easily. Although students may find it less enjoyable, they are incapable of producing an assignment that would help them be the most prepared for the course. Students' lack of motivation, inadequate knowledge of content, and difficulty of coming to agreements all make it unfeasible.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1162118d08ac,FA35444BD9C6,why are some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure that the students countinue learning during their break ? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+634947e6ed35,FA35444BD9C6,some schools are better then some schools in the county of virgina. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c44c8460f576,FA35444BD9C6,the schools in the state are most likely to give out projects to keep students assure to countinue to learn during the break. student are likly to not do anything during a break because during the break student want to relax and go have fun with their girl firends and faimly members. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee70b88781fb,FA35444BD9C6,student that are smart will do the project ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6bee916c989a,FA35444BD9C6,during the break the bad students be doing sexual things and having a nice time during the break and to the students that are mostly to do the project will be disapointed on how they failed the project ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e77ad31e76c2,FA35444BD9C6,student design there projects in a better way then teachers be doing because the way that teachers put there projects togeather to clarafie the way the project should be done ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c48881415881,FA35444BD9C6,why would shools require student to do a project during the break ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca772ce92cee,FA35444BD9C6,do teachers know that the black community haves like twenty persent of our students in the class room are not going to do the project to help a student during a school break is to go to the student home a give him work or notes to studdy over the break. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+031d16865928,FA35444BD9C6,to have a nice grade and to succsed in life is to do your work in the class room and to always be something in life and to be respectful to others and to do a project when it's do the next day for a person thats always doing a project that will make your teacher happy that you did it over the break. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4f85bf395d1,FA35444BD9C6,"some schools that hand out projects during a school break is not the class that i would want to be in because when the teachers put all that pesure on the student thats what makes us want do the projects when the teacher give it to us. 
+",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+14c6aa6d6fcb,FA35444BD9C6,students are require to complete summer projects to continue learning during their break to assure that when student come back that the studnet will have a clear mind that he or she will know how to to the work that he or she gives them. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+670cb65cdeca,FA3E37900E3D,"My mother once told said ""
+
+It's good to try new things , but do what's best for you"" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ef7c2aff26e9,FA3E37900E3D,"I do agree with the decision of students participating in a extracurricular activity like, sports or working on a specific project or idea. Even working with council members. ",Position,Effective,,,
+6dd984563686,FA3E37900E3D,students need more to do then just the simple things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bf08059d9dc,FA3E37900E3D,everyone should try something different once in a while. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51033f8e5e7d,FA3E37900E3D,competing in sports is more of a fun and energetic way to entertain yourself in what you do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee49025afa87,FA3E37900E3D,"50% of people who participates in sporty events is more likely to get out there more and try newer things, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b1c9b8b80ea,FA3E37900E3D,", #1: Try new things but don't go too far with it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c52bfd1885f,FA3E37900E3D,"The way that the new idea occurs may effect how you do things normally, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7315a536e008,FA3E37900E3D,Be safe and put forth your best effort in what you do and what happens. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0712b853bf78,FA3E37900E3D,"I agree and believe that students should participate in sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council because, in my opinion students may try new things based on what they like and how they feel towards it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c355a678f73,FA4FE7706A1A,the use of a car limit using can help in different  ways ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ba835c042896,FA4FE7706A1A,it could help us save the planet from a greenhouse effect ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13be3f766df6,FA4FE7706A1A,improve safty as it woul be a lower chance to get into a car crash with can result in injury or death ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be25fccd9c41,FA4FE7706A1A,t would make the wourld a better place and here to explain why limit usage is good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec9612272866,FA4FE7706A1A,"in the story its says that as the population grows more in american they has to be a production in cars to help the person to get to one place to another. but however in january 1995 many americans were cash-strapped due to the decrease in driving along with the unemployed wasnt going to work aanyways as they try to recover underway. in another story it tells how people could live without cars but in germany as one of the family said ""when i had a car i was always tense and im happier this way. As studys show that 70% of familes do not own cars but as well are happy just by walking or riding a bike beacuse cars make up the greenhouse gas. While in the vauban homes are being adopted in order to provide transportation with less spaced parking then walking all of the way to the mall. in america the agency of environmental are staring to promote and also want a ""car reduced"" area where they can help perserve the wild life as 80% of the law has gone to the highway and the other 20% is the transport its self. In other places they have a car-free day which means no cars or transport will be used through out the day as many people would take a bike or walk or even hike as one person said ""its a good opportunity to take away stress along the pollution in the air"" as it shows that there should be a limited usage of cars. As this could impact the world along with the enviorment around it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9614fa4248ba,FA4FE7706A1A,the care usage limited idea is good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cc89aa664056,FA4FE7706A1A,it helps people support the enviorment along with decreasing greenhouse gas and smog as people will either take a bike or walk to get from place to place without having the traffic jam struggle. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+005239304fb9,FACC34F1875E,"Five cities have been reported to have had a day to where they banned cars. They call these days, ""Car Free Days"". Vauban, Germany; Paris, France; Bogota, Colombia; Cali Colombia; and Valledupar Colombia. This day ended with positive results. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2fdb35a06ff0,FACC34F1875E,"For starters, the residents in Vaulban, Germany have given up their cars. Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbudden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg. Vauban's streets are completely ""car free""--except the main thoroughfare. Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park--large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for forty thousand dollars, along with a home. As a result, seventy percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and fifty seven percent sold their cars just to move here. In the passage, ""In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars"", Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and a mother of two, she quotes,"" When I had a car, I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.""
+
+Additionally, Cars are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai ten to make  their homes. Experts say that that is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emmissions from tailpipes. Passenger cars are responsible for twelve percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to fifty percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.
+
+Futhermore, after days of near-record pollution, Paris, France enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. ""Paris bans driving due to smog"" by Robert Duffer, states that congestion was down sixty percent in the capital of France, after just five days of intensifying smog. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab9e536c678a,FACC34F1875E,there are some advantages of limiting car usage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5d9305f52410,FACC34F1875E,"limiting car usage, you're also limiting pollution, carbon emissions, greenhouse gas emissions, etc.    ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4a33cce51b5,FACF20D0D847,"If you want a really excellent job, be a cowboy in the Seagoing Cowboy program. In fact, take it from me a cowboy who rides waves. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ce5b9767fa54,FACF20D0D847,"I became a Seagoing Cowboy when me frend invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. It was when World War II was going on. Some countries were left to die and had nothing. So they formed the UNRRA and hired ''Seagoing Cowboys.'' Both I and Don Signed up.
+
+In August of 1945, they recived orders to go and report to New Orleans.''We arived August 14,'' Luke recalled ''the day the Pasific War ended.'' They got their seaman's papers and and borded the SS Charles. W. Wooster. They then headed for Greace.
+
+Before I got to Greace he turned 18 wich ment the military could draft me .''When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip,they tolde me to just keep doing that for my service,'' Luke says.
+
+''The cattle boat trips were an unbeliavable opportunity for a small-town boy,'' Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China.'' but seeing the Acropolis in Greace was very speacial. So was takeing a gondola ride in Vince, Italy a city with streets of water.''
+
+It was also hard work. I had to clean, feed, and care for the anamals. I seved as a night wathman, meaning I had to cheak on all the anamals and report to the captin every hour. One ranny night after my hourly report I slipped on a ladder and fell on my backside. I was fine but couldn't work for a couple of days because of broken ribs. I also had fun too and played vollyball games in empty holdes and more. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aa1c365f9e3d,FACF20D0D847,"So in conclusion, It's splendid to be a Seagoing Cowboy because it shows you the vertue of helpping others ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e80aec8c9dc0,FAF91DDF582C,Some schools require students to complete summer projects to guarantee that students will continue to learn during their summer break. It is essential that students keep learning even though they are taking a break from school ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+711be2df93ad,FAF91DDF582C,these summer projects should be teacher-designed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cbcfe2f6c748,FAF91DDF582C,the student's teacher will know what that person needs to work on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4da9922e4362,FAF91DDF582C,"If a student were to choose what they would like their project to be about, they could probably decide to work on something that does not require much effort ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe9627f34eb0,FAF91DDF582C,"therefore, it would be best if a professional particularly assigned a certain topic to help his or her pupil designated to help them grow and become more efficient in their academic life. However, if the student believes that there is a specific topic they believe they need to practice more than the teacher should consider to make an exemption. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a481fb7631c,FAF91DDF582C,This action would ensure that the student will be ready to tackle classroom assignments once they are back to school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ba087e57509,FAF91DDF582C,"Not only that but it would also let the student perfect their skills and be prepared in class. These projects designated to students will surely boost the alumni's knowledge and confidence on that specific topic. Therefore, the student will not struggle as much as they would have without the extra help. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07a99d0eed4a,FAF91DDF582C,"if teachers assign students particular homework designed to help their alumni be more efficient in class, it is undeniable that their student's classroom performance will have a positive effect in their academic life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a61634860b70,FAF91DDF582C,"The teacher ,being a professional, will have more understanding of what their student needs to work on. He or she can personalize the project to better help the student understand and learn about their assignment. The extra help given to the alumni will have positive results and they could use their knowledge acquired by the project on other classes, or these young adults can use this information outside of school to help them handle outside of school life situations. If trained professionals give students homework during summer break, then those students will be able to see how this extra work helped them master skills when school opens again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f5d6443bd15,FAF91DDF582C,"Students should not be given the privilege to choose their own project assignments. Some students would pick easy topics that would not require them to put much effort, this will deeply harm the student academically. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e4fcb7cfc54,FAF91DDF582C,"Instead of working hard to perfect an area in which the student struggles, they would rather choose something that is easy and would get done quickly. This is why it is better if teachers gave students their assignments ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9aa843a1d9a0,FAF91DDF582C,"However, it can not be guaranteed that the students will learn or understand the homework assignment. For that reason could be that maybe the student is not ready to take on that particular topic. Without a doubt, it is known that not all students learn the same way and not all understand what they have learned. Everybody learns at their own pace and in their own way ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c04d2333371f,FAF91DDF582C,"If the student believes that the designated work is too hard, or maybe too easy, then they should talk to their teacher and suggest a different topic. Also, if the students thinks that there is another area they need to practice more, they should ask their teacher to consider their request. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e28c9214d70b,FAF91DDF582C,"Schools that require students to continue learning during the summer will see positive results in students academic lives. Designated work from teachers will greatly help alumni master and perfect classroom skills. Not to mention, students will acquire more knowledge on these areas with the extra help that was provided. If the teacher knows what their students need to work more on, those students will soon be ready to take on anything once school is in cession again. If students were given the liberty to pick their projects, would the students actually learn from it? What happens if the student chooses an easy project, when they could have been working on some other topic that they know they have trouble with? This will certainly not be a good idea. As professionals, teachers know what is best for their students if they have been observing their classroom performance. However, Many teachers sometimes overlook a few things in which student have trouble with. When this happens the student should take a step forward and let their teacher know what it is they think they need to work. This way the teacher can look back and verify is this person does need to practice more in the areas that they may be struggling. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+50a6b19c35b5,FB1553163CF5,"Imagine visiting a planet like ours, maybe it was just like ours at a point where it could have living animals, water, and maybe even trees. Venus has the type of look because it the only plant that looks more like our planet the Earth. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6e275db3e0a4,FB1553163CF5,"First, on paragraph two of the article called "" The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" it says that ""Venus is often reffered to as Earths twin, its the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+609d6433024d,FB1553163CF5,This shows on how cool it would be too going into a planet that we havent been to and maybe it can be like ours ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85b8164ff273,FB1553163CF5,its a worthy try even though dangerous thing happen because we never know what we could find. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d779e85c61a7,FB1553163CF5,"Also, because in paragraph 4 it states that ""Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+91e338d155ff,FB1553163CF5,this shows on how close it is to Earth and its worth a try trying to go there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbc617c1cb6c,FB1553163CF5,"Lastly,it would give out new oppurtunities to go into other planets, because ""venus is the second planet from the sun"" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8d5a87ef1247,FB1553163CF5,"this shows and how dangerous it could be, but if we make it we can see stuff like the sun and notice stuff we cant see thru a camera. also, it would give out more conficence of going into space and going into a diffirent planet. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5db61e9eff9,FB1553163CF5,"In conclusion, People should go into Venus because it show on new opportunities and find new things we didnt know about. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c6a4a42874d5,FB528A6DAF0C,"I think that participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is not a good idea and heres why, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+17c1eca279a4,FB528A6DAF0C,"It might be fun to go and help others in need but what about your job, lots of things could happen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbfe242662e3,FB528A6DAF0C,"You might have an exiting time but what about all the responcebilities you have if you go. I mean I wouldin't go because of that or because what if one person doesin't want to do it any more, our someone gets car sick. A lot of things can happen and you know what, I dont want to get car sick if I were you. Also what about home, theres opportuneities here. What about the people who are in need right now. There is so much you could do right here right now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+281b612b46ae,FB528A6DAF0C,You don't have to go somewhere els just too help somone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2c2a9a829d3,FB528A6DAF0C,"there are people out here that are in need bad but your going to Greece just too help other people. It's a good idea but just think about what you good do here. I'm one of those people who love helping others but I know that I could just help someone here because going to Greece!! I wouldin't want too because I already have more than enuogh people I could help, things I could see, things I could do. There is just so much to do, and to see. I know that if you just think there will be something to do for our community just like that. Like I said you don't need to got to Greece to see that! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1d8757f0849,FB528A6DAF0C,"Those were some of my resons why you shouldin't go to Seagoing Cowboys program. Like I said,it would be fun but think about what could happen before you go and give it a try. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+210b437fe6bb,FB6A513EBFC6,"Venus is the second planet in the Milky Way solar system, that is so close yet so mysterious. Its conditions are unhabitable and unsafe for humans, making Earth seem safe despite some dangers it also has. Venus may well have also been covered with oceans like Earth currently has. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9b0f5154ba7d,FB6A513EBFC6,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents ",Position,Effective,,,
+6f511ed46932,FB6A513EBFC6,hovering ,Claim,Effective,,,
+443b7a2b5fa0,FB6A513EBFC6,silicon carbide ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c52f264be84a,FB6A513EBFC6,"mechanical computers. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+b6e8157f91c9,FB6A513EBFC6,The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite dangers by his well written explantion of ship hovering. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ece4e565253d,FB6A513EBFC6,"The author says NASA has an idea on how to send humans to study Venus, ""...possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray"" (Paragraph 5). The ship would hover above, avoiding the dangerous conditions by remaining away from it. Allowing the scientists to be close enough to study some elements of Venus, and to have more context on how to understand it more, without a human possibly dying. To further support this, the author states, ""...hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight..."" (Paragrah 6). The author is aware that hovering is not the most effectove technique, but he supports the idea by hinting it will still be worth it because information can still be gathered, despite the limits. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a23181467a09,FB6A513EBFC6,"Although it is not the most persuasive support and idea he displays that Venus is a worthy pursiut, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1db0dd451b19,FB6A513EBFC6,it can still perhaps show how he supports it by giving details. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+88351171e7c9,FB6A513EBFC6,"He explains although samples of rock, gas or anything else cannot be gathered, due to the distance, challenges can motivate scientists to progress on more ways to study Venus, to apply more knowledge. He clearly shows his opinion that the dangers should not be limited by dangers or doubts, but should drive humanity to excellence and advancement. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f67b75bd6728,FB6A513EBFC6,The author's insight on silicon carbide supports his idea that Venus is a worthy pursut despite the dangers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1bf3651c851,FB6A513EBFC6,"Simplified elecotronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in chambers. The authors explains it by stating, ""...stimulating the chaos oof Venus's surface and have lasted weeks in such conditions"" (Paragraph 7). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7a48960a52a,FB6A513EBFC6,"He does not support this idea throughly, giving limited information to convice the reader of his claim. He only says it can last in challenging conditions for a limired amount of time, but does not mention any support, leaving silicon carbide as his weakest support on how using that, can convice people that Venus is a worthy pursit depsite the dangers it possesses. He uses only one fact, but not not give enough anaylsis to make his argument strong or very clear. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e65c0ac759f8,FB6A513EBFC6,The author supports well how mechanical computers would make studying Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fb16e9f39fe,FB6A513EBFC6,"A project called mechanical computers was first evisioned in the 1800s. The author further supports how its worthy by stating, ""...these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all"" (Paragraph 7). He describes it as safer, since gear usually ensures that someone will not be exposed to a certain conditon in a inhabitable environment for humans. He further argues that modern computers are more fragile in extreme conditions, and are not as strong as mechanical computers. He strongly supports it by comparing it to other popular technologies, ""...imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin"" (Paragraph 7). He explains in comparison, that systems using mechanical parts are far more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces, unlike modern technology. He uses well thought out support and evidence, to argue that Venus is actually a worthy pursuit even with the dangers it gives. He believe that studing Venus will lead to challenges that will further evolve humanity and help it prosper. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c83cd5feb9c,FB6A513EBFC6,"In ""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" the author supports Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presnts through his analysis of hovering, silicon carbide, and mechanical computers. He supports his ideas with evidence and also the analysis he has with his knowledge by research. He uses facts, and not a lot of opinions to express his ideas and belief that Venus is a worthy pursuit. He colcudes his argument that humanity's travels on Earth and beyond should never even be limited by threats of dangers or doubts. Without that, knowledge will be expanded and fuel the innovation of the human world and beyond. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+380c6adab7b1,FB6C139752AA,"In the text the outhor suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despirate the dangers it represents, which is correct. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b895f20dae06,FB6C139752AA,"The text explain correcthy each factor that Venus has, it also explain with details what are the dangers that being on Venus presents. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2448e38212c2,FB6C139752AA,"Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus is also the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Venus temperature avarage is over 800 degrees Farenheit,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than wht we experience on our own planet, it means that Venus is unable to have humans living there, because the factors like temperature, water, and ways to get food are so complicated. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f08b68d074b9,FB6C139752AA,The fact of Venus being the second planet from the sun makes it a lot more dangerous for a human to be there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+52fc93bb18ed,FB6C139752AA,"Scientifics explain that Venus has the hottes surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7227506ba3cf,FB6C139752AA,"People ask ""Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?"", well Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, it means that Venus was the most similiar of the 8 planets in the solar system that looks more similar to the Earth, they belief that really long time ago Venus was covered with oceans and it could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters, which is another idea that makes the author think about know more about Venus. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffcdcb1907ab,FB6C139752AA,"Now The National Aeronautics and Space
+
+Administration (NASA) has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad27030afe25,FB6C139752AA,"The NASA has some projects in mind to do one of them is to send mechanical computers to Venus to take pictures and videos that way they can have a better idea of how Venus looks like. They are trying to use the same mechanical computers that they use during World War II, because mechanical parts can be made more resistant to preassure,heat, and other forces, it means that the NASA plans to send an electronic device to Venus just to see the place and star planning a visit, the would adap the device that way it could resist the different factor that are fount on Venus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15b7443f5306,FB6C139752AA,"Venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3177de7896cb,FB7DB9D91933,"""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"", the author suggetst that studing Venus is worthy but also dangerous. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+e56c354e1a87,FB7DB9D91933,"The author tells us how Venus is ""one of the brightest points of light in the night sky"" and also the second largest plantet with the ""nickname misleading since Venus is actually a planet"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7696a102475,FB7DB9D91933,There so many things to learn about when it comes to different planets. It would be worthy to go study more things about plantets so we can know about them and maybe one day lots of people coud go on one of these plants without just being a scientist. The bad thing about is we still don't have the best ways to get there and back saflty. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f3ca8efee8a,FB7DB9D91933,"
+There is 97 percent of carbon dioxide in Venus and plus more of a challeng is the clouds of highy corrosive and eve 800 degrees Fahrenheit. It makes it a little hard to be able to go on Venus because of all that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a22675f1ffbd,FB7DB9D91933,"""NASA is working on other approaches to studiying Venus. For example, osme simplified eletronice made of silicaon carbid have been tested in a chamber simulation the chaos of Venus's surface. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b7d9405ba92,FB7DB9D91933,"stiving ot meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becasse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becasue human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded ot meet the very badges of imaination and innovation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+322f607bbf33,FB8C67F0AC92,"Venus is often called the ""Evening Star"" for being the brighest points of light. It's also the second planet close to the sun. And as it's simple to see from distant, it proved a very challenging place for examining closely. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2cfbb11cb56e,FB8C67F0AC92,It's very worthy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5245704c962,FB8C67F0AC92,"even though Venus's thick atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide. But getting through the clouds are worse with them being sulfuric acid as a high danger sign for spaceships to only be there for a few hours. The temperature has scortching heat of 800 degrees fahrenheit and 90 times more pressure than our planet. Venus has impediments of erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes to anything landing on it's surface ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9baf58e57b0,FB8C67F0AC92,Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may once of been like Earth with oceans and various forms of life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f1f88d22e16,FB8C67F0AC92,The Astronomers think it's a good idea to kepp trying to land on Venus even though their spaceships never last more than a few hours and believe there might be various life forms like Earth and some oceans. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6cb3d3113b35,FB8C67F0AC92,"But Venus is to deadly with acid, scortching heat, and 90 times our pressure that could crush a submarine. Also Venus has some lighting that strikes anything landing on it's surface and erupting volcanoes with frequent earthquakes. Venus also has a surface of rocky sediments with valley's, mountains, and craters under the clouds and atmosphere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+328b8f075645,FB8C67F0AC92,"People have tried sending multiple spaceships to Venus but they never came back. It was the brightest ""Evening Star"" but the most dangerous planet with sulfuric acid atmosphere. Astronomers know the dangers of going to Venus but want think theres life form and oceans like Earth. If anything was to land on it's surface, lightning would strike it and the spacecraft could only last a few hours if lucky ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+178904e95552,FB8C67F0AC92,"My conclusion to this is that Venus is a dangerous place but I would like to see whats on that planet, and know if there really is any life form or oceans. If so the astronomers might take some life from there adn water to bring and test what it actually is. But they can't send people into acid atmospheres and scortching heat just to land on Venus. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb68429b3ef5,FBABC3FB451D,The technology would be valuable because it would allow students to focus on their assingments. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2b681d623b51,FBABC3FB451D,This technology could keep students on task and allow for them to have a learning environment that they could thirve in ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+effbd8ac56bb,FBABC3FB451D,This technology could also create a better world in general by enhancing the future generations knowledge. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a91d0ea24d4b,FBABC3FB451D,"Technolgy has become a everyday thing in our lives and has created many distractions for students. With this new technology students could continue focusing on what's important, their school work. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a67f1e247805,FBABC3FB451D,"This would make students grades improve and allow them to have a better oppurtunity in the real world. Occording to the text, the technology would also allow ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."" This means the technology could adjust itself to learn how the student works, instead of the other way around. Also ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,"" meaning that the technology would work for each student around the world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d4f1b3dbc95,FBABC3FB451D,This technology would also create a better living environment across the globe. This is because computers could explain lessons to students in ways a human couldn't. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ff90ab711755,FBABC3FB451D,"The computer could analzye the students face, see any confusion, and change the lesson plan into what the individual student needs. This is all plausible because the text omits that the technology ""could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" This could make jobs easier for teachers, and increase the future generations knowledge by teaching them more than a human could. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6d8e1afdb224,FBABC3FB451D,"This technology could seriosly improve schools for the better and allow them to forever change how we learn. Students could be individually taught, and they would always learn because the computer would still know if the student is confused or not. This could create worldwide peace because students could fully grasp from histories mistakes and continue to forever make the world a better place.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+19975c07693b,FBB861DBF984,I disagre with technology to read the emotional expressions of students in classroom . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+685d11fd9edd,FBB861DBF984,I dont like the fact that technology can read students emotional expressions because teachers dont always have to know whats going on in teens personal life . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1436c7028df7,FBB861DBF984,"one reason teachers shouldnt know everything about teens personal life because teens in highschool go through alot . Teens have house problems that they dont want know body to know about ,teens get bullied,and also some teens deal with personal body problems . This is the reason i disagre with technology reading kids emotional expressions . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9880c34ad8d,FBB861DBF984,In the text it states that the facial expressions for each emotion each universal ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fab14a59bb25,FBB861DBF984,"observes Dr. Huang ,so that means he can se every thing you are feeling .THE Text states that to an expert , faces dont lie ; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebirty isn't being truthful . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94528a0c5381,FBB861DBF984,This are other reason why i dont perfer technology reading people faces ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cb3ef6f13d78,FBB861DBF984,But i also have a good thought on technology reading people faces . ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4f8bd5b02a03,FBB861DBF984,One reason is that when a kid get in trouble at school and lie about something he did the teacher can get the computer and tell if he is lieing . It also tates in the story the it can tell if you are being truthful . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc4a7916a84c,FBB861DBF984,Another reason i like the tecgnology reading people expressions is because police can use the computer. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d79c4f4c8a92,FBB861DBF984,The police can use the computer for bad people that does bad things . The police can scan they face and their fingerprints also . Also judges can use them when people have a to go to court for a case they have . The judge can scan heir face and see if they are lien .And paremts can also used the computer on their child . And people can also used them to see if other people are lien or however they feel. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9f1e8a816c5,FBB861DBF984,"In the text it states that even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression ""(like not smilingas broadly). using video imagery , the new emotion -reconginition softwaretracks these facial movments -in a real face or in a painted face of mona lisa . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69678ff2420b,FBB861DBF984,"By weighting the different units,the software can even identify mixed emotions ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8f7535c2a74c,FBB861DBF984,"Each expression is compared aganist a neutral face (showing no emotion). this explain how advance technology can be .
+
+We as humans practice on this same impressive evey day . For example we can tell if our freind or families are upset . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbdf542e2c72,FBD21BB50633,I agree that students should have an extracurricular activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+85da115b3346,FBD21BB50633,"It can help them stay active, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0803ee21d054,FBD21BB50633,also help the school out a lot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6173094d5a65,FBD21BB50633,Having an extracurricular activity means having a extra thing to do in school that you like that will provide for the school, like for an example: being the school announcer in the morning it's something that you like that will provide for the school and it is why students should have an extracurricular activity. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+5da527fb2aff,FBD21BB50633,The extracurricular activity is effective to students and it will help them pursue in the future. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+82b8d2a21808,FBD21BB50633,"Example: say if Generic_Name was very shy to talk in front of a class, but he really want to become a business man and it requires talking in front of is business partners about business, but he still to shy to talk; so he does a extracurricular activity about debating and he found confidence in his self, and now he can talk in front of class presentations and it will help him to become a better business man. that's an example of the effects that it do to a student's character. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21614bdba689,FBD21BB50633,"Extracurricular activity's can also give some relive to the principal's, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a29c5edc4fdf,FBD21BB50633,"if the students help out the principal than the the principal won't have too much too do on that day like for dances, pep rallies, and meetings and ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52822b5b327b,FBD21BB50633,thats why students should have an extracurricular activies. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e8f11d376b37,FC1196671EE9,I think that having this new technology in the classrooms would be a good thing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+182f5b4689fa,FC1196671EE9,Many people may not agree with me but new can be good ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4e5676a354e,FC1196671EE9,Also many kids may think that its a bad idea but trying different things in the classroom could help many kids out. And the teachers would love that. But even if its not good the teacher wouldn't have to keep using it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5cb704aa62c0,FC1196671EE9,"In the artcle the author says, ""Hold on! Can we actually ""calcuate"" emotions - like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to espress how we feel?"" (D'Alto 2). ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed6c81fabefb,FC1196671EE9,Here the author makes a good point. Could this really would? How is it possible? Is it helpful? And there are many more quetions that I'm sure people have about it. But trying something new and seeing if technology like this could really be valuable is wroth trying out ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6f959d1adff,FC1196671EE9,Also this would be a good thing becasue kids would learn about art. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8ce9b66b3e24,FC1196671EE9,The Mona Lisa is very famous and many people know about it. And learning more about it would be great thing for the kids in the classroom ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf0d438d6a5c,FC1196671EE9,I can see why many people wouldn't like it in thier classroom though. Maybe the teacher doesn't like art. Or maybe they don't know that much about art. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f250bc41af85,FC1196671EE9,But even if that's the reason for not trying this out I believe it would be good for the kids and they would learn something new and different. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+53c6fc3d6c70,FC1196671EE9,And that can be very imporant in the classroom and for the childen ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+394d7006d596,FC1196671EE9,"At the end of the artile the author stats, ""By the way, did making a happy face in the experiment also mkae you feel slightly happy?"" (D'Alto 9). Using this technology can not only help the kids learn about the art behide it but could also help them learn more about themseleves. And to me and I'm sure to many teachers that is the most imporant thing of all. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a3363817aaaf,FC27ECB471A4,I would be on boat and agree to do this in schools because its not a bad idea helps us students get a better education ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8ff9a5aa00cd,FC27ECB471A4,if you really think about it becuase it won't take 30 mins wasting class time on to log in to a computer if you scan your face it would be alot easier to sigh in and get straight to the lesson. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9e3fef7eb981,FC27ECB471A4,This idea can also help kids because in the text is told us that the computer can read are facial expression ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d818765b7ef,FC27ECB471A4,the computer can read all 44 of your face muscles which it can help too see if someone id down and the teachers ca see that the compter is telling them somehting is going on maybe at home or theres a problem going. Maybe this new thing can help stop bullying or seek people with depression and see if that student need help. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1385bde3b24,FC27ECB471A4,But how is this face scan going to work in the first place? Well my guess is the camera so then it can stop theif because if someone tried to login without your permission you can see who it was maybe even contact the police. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e68e5f46b1f1,FC27ECB471A4,I would go for this idea just help everything get easier because who knows maybe this can happen and everyone can get a laptop education would be fun and kids would maybe pay attention more so its taking 2 birds with one stone alos can stop kids from horse playing around keep children on task. Maybe even make the teachers job easier. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+219c7ca5de39,FC5C7E89577A,"the author described about the computer system. and the author wrote about Dr. Huang realies on the work of pshychologist, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). and Dr. Paul has classified six basic emotions-happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. the author wrote the fact of human. ""For istance, you can probably tell how a friend feeling simply by the look on her face"". and Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to thelp them paint facial muscles precisenly enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similiar anatomical information as electronic code. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. And the author wrote the definition and some examples of how imagne a computer can describes human feelings. The last thing is the Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d8c8081b488,FC5C7E89577A,Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions! ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c9095976a13c,FC7A3692794B,"Well the bad thing about being over seas. Is that when you or one of your family members go.
+
+There is a 99 percent chance that you or your family memeber will die or get hurt.
+
+Luke also wanted to go seasgoing to show his friend how manly he is. Because his friend thought that hhe was scared to do something that is not normal in his life.
+
+So Luke wen't over sea to show his friend he is not afraid. But when Luke is over seas something bad happens. Luke is feeding the animals, and he trips over something and just about fell over board to his death.
+
+Luckly a peace of medal was sticking out the side of the ship and caught Luke before he almost died. Aways be carful when you on a ship traviling. Something bad aways happens. But anways Luke had a friend come along so they could hang out like most friends do.
+
+Luke and his friend was on the ship, and they stopped at a place where the horses and the animals had to get off. Then the boys had to find something to do so where the horses and the animals stayed is where the two kids started to play games like Baseball, Volleyball, Table-Tennis, Fencing, Boxing, Reading, and Whittling.
+
+So when the two boys were done doing their stuff like playing games they wen't back to their homes, to see their families. But when their time was up off seeing their families they both wen't back to the ship, and said bye to their families for a long time then it was time to go. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60d8e14c804f,FC9BC150809F,"Cars play a huge role in our lives. It is the most easy and common way of transportation. In some parts of the U.S.,you can drive a car even if you're 15. Before cars weren't invented,people used bicycles,subways,roller skates,busses....
+
+If you want to go to somewhere by bike,it is gonna take much more time than it takes by car. That's why people prefer driving cars insted of riding bikes or using subway. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0ad5bf5ade4c,FC9BC150809F,"However,there are some disadventages of driving car. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+44ae9d6a05f0,FC9BC150809F,Air pollution is one of them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b4ac22c5c8d,FC9BC150809F,"Our world is getting dirtier every day and it's under risk. The glaciers are melting and the animals who live in the north pole are dying. The people who are aware of this,don't drive cars and protest it. In the article""In German Suburb,Life Goes On Without Cars"", Elisabeth Rosenthal says ""Street parking,driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg,near the French and Swiss borders. Vuban's streets are completely 'car-free'-except the main thoroughfare,where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs,and a few streets on one edge of the community. As a result,70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars,and 57 percent sold a car to move here. Vauban,completed in 2006,is an example of a growing trend in Europe,the United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use,as a component of a movement called'smart planning.'""""I think,the intention to forbid the car usage is to divert people to drive bycyles or subway other than driving cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+becbf418d521,FC9BC150809F,The other disadvenatge is ,cars make us lazy. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+7cf734dca463,FC9BC150809F,Before cars weren't invented people walked. People are gaining weight of not w ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+47fe683f81c1,FC9BC150809F,"In the article""The End Of Car Culture"" Elisabeth Rosenthal says:But America's love affair with its vehicles seems to be cooling. When adjusted for population growth,the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter,according to an analysis by Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives,an ivestment research company. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009...."" Also in the article:""Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota""the author,Andrew Selsky says:""In a program that's set to spread to other countries,millions of Colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday,leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+55946d4fea18,FCF6588BC52B,"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. Well there is this New software that has been developed that can detect how others are feeling better than humans can. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7edd3f738d18,FCF6588BC52B,I believe that the value of using technology to read students' emotional expression is important and it should be used. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+aeac909dec2d,FCF6588BC52B,"Since this technology records facial expressions, the same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc343870229c,FCF6588BC52B,"Another reason is ""Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f4cdc0c5ffef,FCF6588BC52B,"Another purpose we can use this for is as a lie detector, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb7b2413d5a4,FCF6588BC52B,"because in the begining of the article it said that Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. So if somebody is lying i'm pretty sure they would be scared to be caught. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2308f8fa1cd5,FCF6588BC52B,"Imagine how much video games will improve with this technology, and medical help too. Also think about all the criminals that will get caught because the new technology will prove that they were lying. As you can see these are the reasons why I think we should use this new kind of technology. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d60154cd4245,FD0C32EA0E5B,"The main characters were Luke and his friend. Basically the story is about his friend giving him a once in a life time opportunity. He first worked at a grocery store and and the bank. When his friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He couldnt say no. So then he went.
+
+He had graduated from high school and had 2 jobs but whem his friend invited him to Europe his whole llife had changed. Since there was a war he went to go help out. He and Don had signed up to be a segoing cowboy. 44 nations joined toggether and formed a UNNRA and he was hired to be a seagoing cowboy. That when you have to take care of horses , mules adnd young cows. That was his job over there in Europe.
+
+He kept going there and he kept helping others. He like his job. The cattle boats were unbelievable for a small town boy it had said. He really enjoyed his job. He toured lots of places like Venice Italy and a city with streets of water. But Luke had made 9 trpis the most of any seagoing cowboy. He traveled across the atlantic ocean and it took him about 2 weeks.
+
+He was taking care of lots of animals and was feeding them 2 or 3 times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats. They had to be pulled. He had helped out his aunt Katie as a boy. So he was prepared for this. On his second trip he was served as a night watchman. His job was to check the animals every hour. Then one rainy night he had slipped down on a slippery ladder. His heart raced. But luckly he lived. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f6706695b17,FD0C32EA0E5B,His life had changed a whpole lot. Thanks to his friend Don. He liked helping out. He couldnt work though because he had cracked ribs. After that he returned to being a seagoing cowboy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a3ac14b27949,FD0C32EA0E5B,it made him more aware of peopl in other countries and thier need. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+875d46358ba3,FD1C07651D9A,I think that the auther did a good job writtening this artivcle because he use good detail to catch the reader and to think a little more about planet venus ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fc845e675914,FD1C07651D9A,"the auther is sau that ( In space term- human have seat numerous of spacecraft to land on this clound-draped world. Each pervies mission was unmanned, and for good reason, sice no spacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. May that is the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three deacades) say the auther in the artivcle. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f30e9518d941,FD1C07651D9A,"The auther also say in the artivcle (that the atmospher of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are in the clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venis atmosphere. He said the on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degerees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet.) Also the conditions are far more extree than anything humans encounter on the earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deppest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any plantes in our solar system even though mercury is closer to ur sun. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6dff3aec8f7e,FD1C07651D9A,"Beyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruping volcanoes powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Astronmers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. Still today venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet venus hasa surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. Furthermore , recall that venus can sometime be our nerest option for a planetary visit, a crucal consideration given the long time frames of space travel. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e1c4112c8d5,FD1C07651D9A,I like this article because it was fun to learn somthing new and that the article and the author was good at laying out his article and also putting in detail and fact what he new about venus it was super easly to do the question. I think that the auther supports the idea vey good in the article because he lay it out for you and that he/she give out fact to supports the reader and to help out a little. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e0047f2d784,FD562A12092E,"During the course of the school year, students learn and take part of the classroom life. Many take notes, create projects, listen to lectures, take tests, and more. However, by the end of the school year, teachers decide to give out summer projects. These projects can vary from reading textbooks to making a piece of artwork to assure learning during their break. There are many debates and questions about the use of summer projects. A certain question circulates around who should design the project; the teacher or the student. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+721712ad341f,FD562A12092E,"Teachers, however, should design these projects ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3da7aa009358,FD562A12092E,"they are the experts, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a15ff0710e3e,FD562A12092E,"they control the classroom, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a64a6ac1949b,FD562A12092E,"students will put in little to no effort in making the project meaningful. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+db779e354e39,FD562A12092E,"Because they are well educated in the subject, they are able to create a project that is both relevant and useful to the students education. For example, my AP US History teacher is well knowledgeable about the history of the United States. Before the school year began, she assigned a project in which a student has to portray freedom in a piece of art. By doing this, she is able to connect freedom in history into a project that can create deep thought towards the subject. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec86a7ba97c1,FD562A12092E,Teachers also control the classroom and decide what to do for the education of their students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c6eb6851d3b5,FD562A12092E,"As a student, I am able to see the hard work put into teaching a class. My teachers have to create the lessons, teach the information, grade paperwork, and much more. However, there is also the aspect of making sure that the students are controlled enough to have the needed information get across. This goes hand in hand with the knowledge of the teacher in the subject. Due to their position of power and the expertise they acquired, teachers know what to do for the education of students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d1da4ab6b92,FD562A12092E,Some may say that students should design these summer projects in order to exercise freedom and creativity. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3c6e2631b908,FD562A12092E,"However, because teachers are the experts and oversee the education of their students in their position, they know what and how to use projects for the students benefit. Both the teacher will exercise their position as a leader and student practice their creativity with the freedom these projects allow for. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cd7bba054def,FD562A12092E,"Students, after a tiring school year, want to relax during their summer break. By allowing students to design the project, they will create it in an uncaring way in order to get it over with. Students will not put the effort in both designing and finishing the project. This will create no benefit, growth, or thought in their education and academics. A personal example revolves around a project my English teacher once gave out. There was no prompt and no requirements other than a works cited. This created a hard time for students to figure out what they needed to do. As seen by this example, allowing students to design their own projects will create no benefit or direction. Without the direction of a teacher, students will not know what or how to do anything that is needed of them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41f69a50fdd0,FD562A12092E,"allowing students to design summer projects is not the most beneficial. This is because the teachers know the information, teachers are in charge of the classroom, and students will have no motivation to create and finish the project. As experienced in personal life and much more, too much freedom is not always for the best.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+29e6cd4abf3e,FD5F79937C4E,"The argument of ""would this technology be valuable in a classroom setting"" seems like it is very one sided. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+04948d12469b,FD5F79937C4E,"Yes, this technology would be 100% valuable in a class room enviroment ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f92299e4b8dc,FD5F79937C4E,"And in the article it give a reason why it is so valuable! ""A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"" ""Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."" 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+631b40832166,FD5F79937C4E,"With these two reasons we can determine the value that they would have in schools. grades would get better, some may inspire to work harder because someone or something can tell they are confused and need help. Another quote that can support my claim is that ""Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication,"" ""so computers need to under stand that, too."" What this means is that the one kid who is afraid to speak up and ask questions or the kids who cant speak at all will get better help, because the computers can identify what emotions they are feeling and help them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+38ba032b17e7,FD5F79937C4E,A drawback to having the technology in the classroom could mean that we could give off the wrong emotions and confuse the computer it self. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f8ed53f1dfb3,FD5F79937C4E,and this could mean ruining the techology or worse. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4f362c993c00,FD5F79937C4E,"Another drawback would be that in paragraph seven it states ""Your home PC can't handle the comples algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f18f8b520433,FD5F79937C4E,"this means that we would have to have advanced technology inside of a classroom, And if it is more younger kids its going to be super hard to keep it from being ruined or broken. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26d6559d9479,FD5F79937C4E,"Another set back would be People who suffer from Depression, Bipolar or PTSD can change emotions constantly and quickly. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b11caa481097,FD5F79937C4E,This is why FACS (Facial Action Coding System) CAN be used in a classroom enviroment as well as being succsesful in said enviroment. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+52e20669f5f7,FD9CC83A98C5,i agree ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e639c14d9249,FD9CC83A98C5,because students who do not like to do sports or anything at all its good for them to do something to keep them busy and occupied ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eda481b96fbb,FD9CC83A98C5,"And someone should at least convince them to try something new in sports.
+
+when i was younger my mom always told me that i should do basketball. Because i wasn't doing a after school sport at all and i didnt like sports at the time. So we talked about doing it and i tried it i kind of liked it it was fun because of the basketball drills and got to meet new friends on the team. after that i started doing flag football, and tackle football and i enjoyed it and i was always busy and occupied. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d3a148d41f4,FD9CC83A98C5,"
+i think students who don't do any sports should try it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+27e6376dfcfb,FD9CC83A98C5,because it will keep you busy and you would enjoy it because you meet new friends and its very competitive. other than that it will keep you from being on your phone and staying home all day bored when you can be out having fun playing sports. And also sports would make you think about what you wanna do in the future if you really like sports and good at it. It would also make your family proud of you because of all the hard work you did to get this opportunity. But it also takes time to be good at something only if you try. because thats the only way to get somewhere. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+018b55bf26b3,FE018F15F8A4,"Cars use a lot of gas and make the world polluted. There are communities that have given up their cars and are sticking to walking and riding bikes. There is a town in Germany called Vauban that make you pay $40,000 with your house if you want to have a parking space. Also in this town there are only two places to park and this means that 70% of the population there down own cars and 57% sold their cars to live there. People in this town say that living there with no cars relieves stress.
+
+In the city of Paris after days of pollution they made a ban on driving to fix the smog.
+
+On mondays motorist that had even number license plates were told not to drive or face a $31 dollar fine. On the next day odd number license plate couldnt drive. 4,000 people were fined and 27 had their cars impounded do to their reaction to the fine. Their were a couple exceptions like plug-in cars, hybrids, also cars carrying more then three people but they make plubic transit free from Monday to Friday.
+
+These acts are happening in countries like Colombia. In Bogota, Colombia they celebrate their third year where cars have been banned with the onmly motor transportation being buses and taxis. They call this day ""The day without cars"" in the capital city which has about 7million poeple. They are doing this to pormote other mean of transportation and violators adn fined $25. A lot of people like to participate in this because it lowers air pollution and stress. Because of this day this city has made 118 miles of bike paths.
+
+In America scientist have found that people 16- to -39 years old are not etting their license. With this drop scientist think that pollution will go down in America. In 2005 the number of miles was at its peak and dropped steadily after that. In April of 2013 the number of miles driven per person was 9% below the peak and is even with the the amount in 1995 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49475feebee7,FE018F15F8A4,All of these are ways to cut down on not only pollution but also stress.    ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+81292cd71c59,FE47325AD93F,"i mean what i can say so far about this artical yeah okay i understand where there coming from and all but its just i cant foucus on the part where i have to sit here an explain to yall that the women mona lisa demonstration is really to bring a smile to your face . The process begins whe the computer constructs3-d computers model to the faces . she also was also 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted 6 percent fealful 2 percent angry . she was peaceful young lady to be honest . But while it shows as much as this computer can . imagine whst a computer that knows when your happy or sad . By the way making a happy face experiments also make you feel slighty happy . According to the feedback theory of emotion, moving your facial muscles not onlt the expresses emotion, btu also mau even help produce them ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b055566f7904,FE47325AD93F,i cant just imagine being able to detect exactly how other are feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotions ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0fd2ad1c65cd,FE47325AD93F,also your home pc cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode mona lisa's smile . And meanwhile muscles called orbicularis oculi palpbraeus make crow's -feetaround your eyes . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8901a3d7098f,FE9AB60822CA,Having a computer that can tell what you are feeling can and can't be a good thing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cdc7756d4d1e,FE9AB60822CA,Like you could be sad or depressed and not want anyone to know but they computer does ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffec36378ff4,FE9AB60822CA,It can send information to people and you didn't want those people knowing how you are feeling. This can cause problems in a family because it may tell them something they didn't want to know. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aaa74240a4de,FE9AB60822CA,First off some people would rather keep to themselves because sometimes showing their real self can hurt others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83278c413009,FE9AB60822CA,"You can always fake being happy or fake being interested in something that you aren't, but the computer can figure out how you are really feeling and let people know that you aren't interested in the thing they are talking about or happy that someone is talking to you. It can ruin everything between people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2067190e3bff,FE9AB60822CA,"The article states that ""The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,"" observes Dr. Huang, ""even though individuals often show carying degrees of expression"" (Paragraph 4). This is saying that sometimes people don't put much effort into emotions like for instance smiling, sometimes people don't smile as broadly as they would like to. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+11ef19bca786,FE9AB60822CA,This is my opinion on being able to have a computer analyze how you are feeling. I think it would be a bad idea and it would be better off to let people keep their feelings to themselves. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8514c3758fbe,FE9AB60822CA,"Computers being able to tell your feelings is a bad idea and shouldn't come to life. We should keep it the same as it is now, where people can be themselves and not worry about people getting scared or hurt by their true selves. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b979b8cfd512,FEA33BCE1FB3,The author emphasis how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is very important to Astronomers. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d208cac2217e,FEA33BCE1FB3,"""The Challenge of Exploring Venus"" mainly supports how Venus is worth the riskand challenge to explore to see if it's as much like Earth as it's said to be, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0ed48804b59b,FEA33BCE1FB3,"it is close to Earth in size and density, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47353e8d6482,FEA33BCE1FB3,"has similiar geographics, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+783deaa7a925,FEA33BCE1FB3,is known as Earth's sister planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8082dcab9510,FEA33BCE1FB3,"First, Venus is set up with similar distancing as Earth ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7bfe23f63278,FEA33BCE1FB3,"it's sometimes often referred to as ""Earth's twin"". The text says that ""Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too."" Venus is so similar to Earth, but yet so challenging to explore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1c1bb8fe1da,FEA33BCE1FB3,"Second, just like Earth Venus has mountains and valleys. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+688a913e3909,FEA33BCE1FB3,"Some might even say long ago there were oceans, because the text says ""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14b19dcdd140,FEA33BCE1FB3,"Then, Venus is known to be Earth's sister planet! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1acebadc445f,FEA33BCE1FB3,"Venus has always been the closest planet to Earth other than Mars, but if Venus is so much like Earth astronomers can't figure out why it's so much more inhospitable than Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+859ffabc6af4,FEA33BCE1FB3,"In conclusion, Venus is a very challenging place to see and be. Venus has not been touched in more than 30 years! In the text it says "".. not a singlr spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."" So although Venus is the sister of Earth astronomers know very little about her. So they keep in pursuit to learn more despite the dangers it presents everytime. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7260519f3a2d,FEE1811CCE57,"Luke signed up for the program just to experience what the journey would be like and his friend asked him then they would have to ride with different kinds of animals like horses. Luke made nine trips and was brave to make that choice. But lukes friend decided to invite luke on this trip so luke was pretty glad that his friend invited him. then luke and his friend were asked to take care of horses,young cows,and mules.
+
+Luke then decided to take his traveling a whole new level especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Luke decided to play games on board like basball,volleyball,table tennis he was also fencing,boxing,reading,and whittling. well being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for luke bomberger. Luke had so much fun being a seagoing cowboy. and leading his family hosts a number of international students and exchange vistors for many and many years so when people bring up seagoing cowboys they can remenber that it is a jorney ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79ab422f0819,FEE1811CCE57,"The lesson in this story is that ""you never know whats going to happen if you take a risk"".   ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+9b229e30cde8,FEF2CAFB3483,"In this article "" unmasking the face on mars"" they are showing us a picture that was taken by a 1976 viking 1 photograph of the face on mars which is just a natural landform ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d13bf534b5db,FEF2CAFB3483,"In paragraph 2 scientists firgured it was just another martian mesa, which they state is common around cydonia. Another detail from paragraph 2 they state only because it had unusual shadows that made it look like an egyptian pharaoh. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a8651f3c8515,FEF2CAFB3483,"In the Paragraph 3 it states ""huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+587a40f7bff2,FEF2CAFB3483,it's just a illusion it wasn't acutually seen or proven to be a human head. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c02893d07f7,FEF2CAFB3483,Another fact which is from paragraph 7 it states Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and snapped about ten photos and it revealed a natural landform. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f574d1a93135,FEF2CAFB3483,"In paragraph 9 garvin who is in the Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft he states ""It's not easy to targey cydonia. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19bed7890e62,FEF2CAFB3483,they just can fly over cydonia and spot it right away. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+59b9498d0117,FEF2CAFB3483,Finally in paragraph 12 garvin states what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae552f9b791c,FEF2CAFB3483,"In this article ""Unmasking The Face On Mars"" it's just a unproven theory that its a face on mars, there is many details in this article that state that it's just a natural landforms. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9154e9b94986,FEFB6689114B,"""Making Mona Lisa Smile'',the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computer to identify human emotions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+759a83426c51,FEFB6689114B,The use of this tecgnology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0599257fb731,FEFB6689114B,it helps read kids mind whenthere upset and not happy ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+51f0710f3874,FEFB6689114B,it helps you to because you dont have to try in read there mind as a teacher the comouter can automatically tell for you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d4500fc8a1e,FEFB6689114B,In that they just wanted to make better ways for humans and computers to communicate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cdef3af1f01,FEFB6689114B,"its that good ''i could modify the lesson ,like an effective human instructor. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a316ff67d81c,FEFB6689114B,"Can it actually calculate emtions 99% better then any smart software?
+
+""The process begins when the computer constrcutios a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3e76685f35c,FEFB6689114B,Not everyone would wanna feel like getting on a computer checking to see if there happy or not. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+b39d78928c7c,FEFB6689114B,"In not everyone would want to sit in front of a computer sing there moving there head trying to figure out if there ok knowing they already no. It '' we humans can tell if someone happy or if someone sad just by looking at there face'' yes its true, in yes we doo it on a daily ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c62ca7f00631,FEFB6689114B,why neeed to have the Facial Action Coding System when we can just keep finishing what we been doing and reading people minds as usally. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c2ba3f94ee34,FF01B32BAC3E,I disagree with this technology ,Position,Adequate,,,
+16243c8ff23e,FF01B32BAC3E,you can make all kinds of facial expressions it doesnt mean there is a certain face for one facial expression. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ae7a03a8a0b,FF01B32BAC3E,"We are all human but we arent same that is what makes all unique we have different faces for different expression. This technology that is being used is not going to tell you everyone is mad or sad, happy, angry. I dont have the same mad as someone else would so what i make one face and im mad? it could just be my face and the way i look and your gonna tell me that i am mad when you really dont have a clue. We cant tell if someone is mad or sad, depressed or even happy they have those feelings themself and sometimes people dont want others to know if there upset so then your just invading there privacy. That could just make things ten times worse than what it already is. There are things we want people to know and that we dont want people to know and its our decsion on whether we want them to know. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+55380c660dfd,FF01B32BAC3E,So yes i disagree with this facial expression technology i dont think we should be invading others privacy that way i think we need to have way more respect for others than what we do now. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c4621d6e08c,FF11B4681D78,I say that we use the technology that was created for helping emotional expressions of students in a classroom. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f6b79e5284a7,FF11B4681D78,"I mean that would help so much. I'm a person that struggles to understand things when they are just said. I'm more of a hands on person but extra help and FACS would help a lot. This shows how humans have came long way in life,in the world. The FACS was created to help not only students but works or coustmers as well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+695a3acb57f9,FF11B4681D78,To be able to tell how a person actually feels is like a skill that needs to be shared with the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+201850064130,FF11B4681D78,"The reason I say we should use this technology is because in the text it says ""in fact we humans perform this same impressive ""calcuation"" every day. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0593ec79cfc5,FF11B4681D78,"For instance,you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course,most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy,worried,etc"". What all that means is when someone is having a bad day and you wanna help them but they say they are fine but you know that she/he is not ok but how can you tell? With the technology that we have we can be able to tell all of that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6be078a18cd8,FF11B4681D78,I know that there are some down falls to this technology what if the student or the person doesn't have a problem and just has a face that makes it look like he/she has a problem. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+634e5cb6dc93,FF11B4681D78,But that's what further devlopment is for. FACS will keep pushing and making more progress when being able to tell a person's emotion. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fe2d6fa4bc2f,FF11B4681D78,This Technology would help the real world and should be made. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65340e276aa0,FF11B4681D78,When someone is in custmer service they could be able to tell if the person is looking for someone quick or if they are taking there time sad or mad. They be able to take the knowledge that they have aquired and turn it into some thing that the person has never seen. They be able to turn a frown upside down. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e1b93e270c9,FF11B4681D78,"When this technology was created it was being tested on the ""Mona Lisa Smile"". They did a good job making and testing it. The FACS breaks down how the function works in the text it says "" The facial expression for each emotion are univeral,"" observes Dr. Huang,""even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression""(like not smiling as broadly)"". What this means is that it takes detail by detail from facial expressions and trun them into ways of understanding of how people feel in certain situations. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1213accb8556,FF11B4681D78,I say that we use this technology because of how it would better man kind in its quest of understanding the human brain and its emotion that comes with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+195cc3b253f1,FF11B4681D78,This technology could help students and teachers/students undertand what they are doing and how they are doing it. If a kid is confused and doesn't wanna speak then the technology can speak for that child. That way that teacher can help to make sure the student understands what is going on more one on one with that student could be the difference in test score. More students would graduate more would have a great career. In the Article it even gives you a little tease of how it works and how you can try it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80d2d87a816e,FF11B4681D78,I find that most effective when reading that you can try some thing when being able to understand different things. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+06abf3417a0a,FF35257B6394,The author did a great job supporting his/her previous statements. The author used many examples and real facts to back up the explanation of why we should keep studying and trying to get to Venus. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+04938070a584,FF35257B6394,"Venus is a complicated planet, with many features that are not imaginable. Although we haven't made many big discoveries about Venus itself, we will still continue to learn, look at, and love everything about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b35f932e803b,FF35257B6394,"The author stated that Venus is extremely dangerous do to the crazy temperatures, radioactivity, and absurdly high atmospheric pressures. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e71da3dfd380,FF35257B6394,"""On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet""(The Challenge of Exploring Venus 3). This quote represents everything previously stated. It speaks of the high temperatures and the atmospheric pressure on Venus' surface and atmosphere. ""Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun""(The Challenge of Exploring Venus).
+
+This quote shows another fact that'll help back up other statements. It talks about how Venus actually has the hottest surface in our solar system. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab7d90f05b0c,FF35257B6394,"In concluson, Venus should continue to be studied and should be understood by everyone. After reading this passage, it's hard not to see the beauty of life. After years and years of studying and learning, maybe one day we'll make a ground-breaking discovery about Venus, and we'll be able to inhabit the planet somehow, along with having a better understanding of our solar system ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c98d72803dca,FF4A215D86BF,You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program it one chance oppurunity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0c9fbdeae6bf,FF4A215D86BF,It allows you to travel places you have not seen before and experienece new things. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+310bbb4edbc1,FF4A215D86BF,"You will be able to take care of animals like the horses,young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. You may be able to go sight-seeing on you spare time. ""And your able to have fun onboard after unloading your able to play games such as baseball and volleyball gamesin the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped pass time"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4d9c799f066,FF4A215D86BF,If you participate in Seagoing Cowboys program you wont have to have two jobs and it gives you a future job for after your highschool graduation. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b8e9d641e7c6,FF4A215D86BF,"""You can be more aware of people of other countries and their needs."" And that awarness stays with you"". The more you travel the more you learn about all kinds of new things you might not have covered in school. Not only are you able to take care of animals you are able to help people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4d3db24af34,FF4A215D86BF,My overall thought on becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is amazed by all the good you would be doing for the world. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4f74790dee8e,FF4A215D86BF,"Espcially since there is a lot of ways that Seagoing Cowboys program change the world. Being in the Seagoing program there is a big resposibilty because you have to make sure everything is in order, you are not forgetting anything, and everything is going as planneed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81cd4c0d815c,FF5FC173E506,"There are many car free cities. Germany suburb life goes on without cars, Automobiles are the linchoin of suburbs. They to to say that it is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas, passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas. In Paris driving has been ban to clear the air of the global society, motorists were orderd to leave there cars at home or suffered a 31$ fine. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined and people had their cars inpound for their reaction to the fine.
+
+Cars have been banned with only buses, taxis permitteed for the day. the goal was to promote alterenative transportation and reduce smog. Not even the rain has stopped people from participating, ""its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,' said Carlos Arturo Plaza. a day without cars is an improvement campaign that begaN in Bogota in the late  mid-1990s.
+
+In the United States, recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The question was asked; has America passed peak driving? the United States, with its broad expanses and suburban ideals, had long been one of the world's prime cultures. But Americas love affair with its vehicles seeems to be cooling. When adjusted for popullation growth, the number of miles driven in the united states peaked in 2005 dropped steadily. Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemployment weren't going to work anyway.
+
+There are many car free cities. mostly because of green house gasses or many other cuases. Such as stress' and air pollution cars have been banned to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. There are been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser and better for walking. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e624755c049e,FF7164909305,I think we should use that technology to see students emotions ,Position,Adequate,,,
+434fbbd3f472,FF7164909305,we would be abel to see how they really feel in that just one picture. we could see how they felt towards someone. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e939119beb8d,FF7164909305,"when they lying too, becuase some students dont like to show or describe how they feel. not just on students we should use it on we should use it on friends and family too. we need to know how to help people if they upstet to cheer them up, or if there happy we need to know what made them happy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c266521d6c8a,FF7164909305,some students/people dont like to express their emotions becuase they think it lame. especially men becuase they dont want to seem weak ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c5e7cb0da4ce,FF7164909305,"everyone should know how they feel that day or how the felt becuase we might be able to help them. it can also see mixed emtions for example in the artical it said "" the software can even identify mixed emtions"". it saying we can see if they are feeling happy and mad or sad or mad together. it can identify what feelings are going in together. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d50a4259e0a0,FF7164909305,it also very cool how just a computer can tell you the percentages of how somebody feels ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+20f9099ca7f1,FF7164909305,"like it awesome becuase you can maybe find out how somebody feels when they see you. it can let them know "" oh he/she gets happy when they see me"" and it might make them happy too. the crazy part of this invention he bulit is thta it parts they use for videogames. it can tell if your really feeling that way or just faking it. it can detect alot of emotions you might be hiding.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+347a3acd8b3f,FF7AFA7FF8B6,"I wanted to inform you that there is a limit for driving a car there has been some changes during this few years. Its not only in America that is going on its in other cities and also in states, where people have been droping there adavantages to drive around and dicide to walk instead or to ride a bus to get to other places, they also do that to save money for the gasoline especially if they drive long distance. For example in German Suburb they have forbidden street parking, driveways and home garages, new district on outskirts of freiburg, near the French and Swiss borders. There's a place called Vauban's and its a total Car-free, 70% of vaubans don't own a car and 57% sold thier car to move here. In Paris, they have banded driving due to smog, can ya'll believe that?;they have done because after days of near pollution paris inforced partial driving to clean the air of global city. people that drived with a even-numbered license plate they were charged a 31 dollars fine almost 4,000 drivers were fine according to Reuters. Now the ""smog"" came from Beijing,China which is one of the most polluted city in the world.
+
+Paris typically has more smog then other European capitals, but eventually the smog cleared enough for The Ruling French party. There's was also a Car-Free day in Bogata and it was a big hit, Colombians usually hiked,biked,skated or even took buses to work during the car-free day if you left early people avoid traffic jams. and there goal is to promte alternative transportation and reduce smog it was a good ways to take way stress and lower air pollution. there's parks and sports centers that have bloomed throughout the city; uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad,rush-hours have dramatically cut traffic. The End of Car Culture, where president Obama ambitious goal to curb the United States greenhouse gas emission,unveiled last week. Americans are buying fewer cars and driving less, but also getting fewer licenses as years go by. theres a question that says 'Has America passed peak driving?""i mean am not sure how to explan ,but am sure america ids the the same as it use to be and now that they are talking or writing a articule about it means that alot of people are driving less and buying cars. A study has shown that young people decreased 23% between 2001 and 2009.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e7f71677860,FF9684AB0131,There are several ways the author suggests studying venus is a worthy pursuit desite dangers along the way. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+65be003d7316,FF9684AB0131,how close Venus is from the sun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16070241c37e,FF9684AB0131,how it is very similar to Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+752b2bcb361c,FF9684AB0131,Also Venus may have had forms of life on it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53d251915c3b,FF9684AB0131,The author gives examples for each one of these claims and how they would give a positive effect. These are just a few reasons we should explore Venus and figure out more about it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eaf0da259026,FF9684AB0131,The first reason to learn more about Venus is how close it is from the sun. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c967d0e3c5f8,FF9684AB0131,"One example for this is when the text states,""Venus is the second planet from our sun."" Which means that it is not very far away from earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc08d04488ae,FF9684AB0131,Another reason to study Venus is how similar it is to earth. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ec7d98966336,FF9684AB0131,"An example for this is when the text states,""Venus is the closest planet to the Earth in terms of density and size."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56596777ca38,FF9684AB0131,A final reason is that Venus may of had forms of life on it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f800cf3205a6,FF9684AB0131,"Evidence for this statement is shown when the text states,""Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."" This statement shows how Venus could have been very, very similar to earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c17703fd0d9b,FF9684AB0131,"In conclusion the reasons for exploring Venus include how close it is to the sun, how similar it is to Earth, and how it could have supported life forms long ago. Yes, it is very dangerest because of high temperature and pressure. But if we come up with a way to lower the temperature and pressure it will be surely worth the work put in. These reason are way we should try to visit Venus in the future. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6c98544e1432,FF9E159AEEF0,"What this story is about is a boy named Luke that helps get animals on and off of the ships that he is one this job is called ""Seagoing Cowboys"". Wha twould you think is hard about this story? not getting sea sick, not falling off the boat, or getting along with the other crew mates? the answer is trying to clean the stalls is my oppinion. All of these things are hard to do, but you can allways go on with life. You try to do the best that you can, but sometimes tou fail ,but you can also succied. His favorite thing to do is to care for animals and he does it in the same way he cares for people. his aunt had a farm and now his childhood farming is starting to pay off the only thing that he never practiced was trying not to get sea sick while he was crossing the Atlantic ocean. He thought that his job was the coolest thing in the world to be doing for his job because he has been doing this since childhood. After all the animals were gone they didn't know what to do. So they played beach games after the stalls were all clean. They played volleyball, baseball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and the other fun games that made time fly by like a rocket. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c054a9fdc7fb,FFD97A99CEBA,"In this article i read about ""Making Mona Lisa Smile"" was about the creator of the art frew how she normally felt which was not so cheerful but more like what she's a normal act she was as half as happy as she was she always was more in a good mood more than a bad. but as i look at the art created by Leonardo da Vinci's i can tell her mood its like a slightly smile but also a i dont care type of person like she's happy but also she can careless whats going on and how things are around her that slight smile on her face shows that she's not always angry but its more of a smerk like something you do when your kinda naughty about something. She's giving like kinda that evil eye. In this picture it also not just about her and her actions but look around her where shes's at look like a lonely river where its a thoughtful place where she can think and for me what sets ut off is the fact that this coloring donest really have any color as much as its just a copy and the real one got a slight color to it not alot of bright out there type of color its more of a ""ehh"" type like its there but not bright like how they express her feelings shes happy therefor its there but than it dont need to be. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+67333b2d1829,FFF868E06176,"Every summer break, students are given projects in certain classes to make sure they continue to improve over the break.
+
+These projects handed out to the students are always made by the teachers, but what if we change that? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4fa74b2f3357,FFF868E06176,Students should one hundred percent be the ones who plan out and create their own summer projects. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6eec20df8c20,FFF868E06176,they know exactly what they need to improve on to be ready for the following year. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e94f42e85af0,FFF868E06176,"Students know what they struggled with and what they were good at during the school year.
+
+Teachers can not always grasp what a student may need in order to keep improving. In order for students to recieve any sort of benefit from the summer project, is if they make it themselves.
+
+If I was able to make my own summer project with my classmate I would know what needed to be included in order for me to succeed. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7c3fe92fabed,FFF868E06176,"teachers tend to make assignments very long, hard, time consuming, and usually very boring. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54a8a099ed48,FFF868E06176,"Teachers can overstep because it may not seem like a lot of work to them, but to the students, it is.
+
+They can put in too much information which can make it less benificial to the students. Doing a project over summer break that is not productive, is a huge waste of time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c207b99166f,FFF868E06176,"Students might be more willing and excited to do their summer projects if they create it themselves because it will be something they all enjoy doing. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff32efd39bc9,FFF868E06176,"Most people I know, including me dont start even looking at the projects that the teachers give to us until the night before schools starts, but if we as students create our own we already know what we have to accomplish.
+
+Due to the amount of excitment for their projects, there will be a large increase in the number of students who complete the task and get a good grade, which starts the school year off on a good note.
+
+I always tend to work best and work harder on the subjects and or topics I enjoy the most.
+
+I would also complete my work in full if it was intresting to me. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de35f04b2589,FFF868E06176,"Students deserve a long, stressless summer, but with the teacher's stressful assignments, that might not always happen for them.
+
+All students deserve a say in what they do with their time over their own break.
+
+It is fair to them and the teachers.
+
+The summer break projects created by the students will be more productive, less time consuming and more fun for everyone.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+532bb13396d8,FFFF80B8CC2F,"Venus is a planet what belong the System Solar. Venus is the second planet from our sun. Earth, Venus and Mars our other planetry neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space term-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land ono this cloud-draped word.
+
+In the atomosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Today go to the univerce is very dangers because not can to breathe and you can not survive.
+
+The NASA has one particulary compelling idea for seding humans to study Venus .At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sesa level on Earth.
+
+NOt can have table or cell phone is a acid or heat capable of melting tin.
+
+The people are very corious what investigator everything the System Solar. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe6dfbd53216,00066EA9880D,Driverless cars are exaclty what you would expect them to be. Cars that will drive without a person actually behind the wheel controlling the actions of the vehicle. The idea of driverless cars going in to developement shows the amount of technological increase that the wolrd has made. The leader of this idea of driverless cars are the automobiles they call Google cars. The arduous task of creating safe driverless cars has not been fully mastered yet. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ca9e1b60c9fb,00066EA9880D,The developement of these cars should be stopped immediately because there are too many hazardous and dangerous events that could occur. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6cf2157f4f19,00066EA9880D,the driver will be alerted when they will need to take over the driving responsibilites of the car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d920880f4341,00066EA9880D,This is such a dangerous thing because we all know that whenever humans get their attention drawn in on something interesting it is hard to draw their focus somewhere else. The article explains that companies are trying to implement vibrations when the car is in trouble. Their are some people out there who do not feel vibrations and therefore would not be able to take control of the car when needed. The article also states that companies are trying to put in-car entertainment into the car while it is being driven. This is just another thing that will distract the person who is supposed to be ready at all times to take over driving when asked to do so. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d52c3216a0e,00066EA9880D,Another thing that can go wrong with these cars is any type of techological malfucntion. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+30930de50889,00066EA9880D,"Every person with any kind of technological device has experienced some sort of error. Now imagine if your car has an error technologically and it takes the life of one your loved ones. The article talks about sensors around the car that read the surroundings of the car and that is what helps he car to drive without a true driver behind the wheel. Those sensors could have a malfunctions and be sensing something that is that even there and make a left turn into a 100 foot deep lake. The vibrations that cause the driver to be notified to drive could malfunction and now the driver has no way of knowing that the car is in trouble and now you, the driver, and the rest of your passengers are being buried in your local cemetery. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d16ff143cb0b,00066EA9880D,who to blame for the wreck if there were possibly some sort of technological malfunciton or even some sort of human error when taking over the driving aspect. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cb665a65fb75,00066EA9880D,Should the manufacturer of the car be blamed or should it be the driver? No one knows because there is so many different factors that attribute to who to assign the blame to. Some of what will have to be made is a judgement call. When it comes to insurance and having to pay for any damages you do not want someone to have to make some sort of judgement call. What if that judgement call that was made was the wrong call? Now there are going to be even more lawsuits today in our courts than there already are. This problem alone will just lead to many more issues today in the world that should not have to be dealt with. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+3e75ef7e0262,00066EA9880D,"With all these things that could possibly go wrong with these driverless cars there is no way that the developement of them should continue any further. In today's society if something bad COULD happen or something COULD go wrong, it WILL happen, and it WILL go wrong. There are just way too many safety hazards that come along with these driverless cars. Becuase of all of these problems that arise with the cars it is just a gargantuan risk to implement these cars into our lifestyles. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+695d181861a1,000E6DE9E817,I am arguing against the policy change ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd97ee1cc0ad,000E6DE9E817,even though there are some children out there that really needs help with their academic work ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1b775274990b,000E6DE9E817,"that does not mean that only because they have a c average that would not let them enjoy their sports or other activities unless they've a B average. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+567bbaa1e805,000E6DE9E817,Sometimes teachers or even principal needs to consider that we should give the help that any student should have ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c32a78f4b19c,000E6DE9E817,"consider student self as steam. Meaning student would start to feel sad nervous, and not wanting to go to school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9658df051dd,000E6DE9E817,because of the reason they have a low averages and they can not participate in other activities or sports. The fact that there are children that would want to enjoy many good things the school is actually giving it to them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e614f469a0e3,000E6DE9E817,"We would want to make changes as, ""like to be a better person for a better tomorrow"" This supports the idea of having have many good thoughts and incasing your work as much as possible. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+579dbb5a3b5b,000E6DE9E817,we should make a vote to see if kids would want to have a school policy of change and having to participate in fun activities but they first need to have at least a B average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c617ea05f906,000E6DE9E817,"you would feel ashame and then many bad things could happen meaning, you would be angry etc. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f4174a618a2,000E6DE9E817,I think that student should have sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f8285040c0e,000E6DE9E817,"it helps them with their health, and problems that they would have personal. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27a1356eae10,000E6DE9E817,I am against this policy change. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1082de1aa198,0029F4D19C3F,I heard you are considering changing the schools policy so that the students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e425994b2124,0029F4D19C3F,"I think that's crazy! If kids don't have and opportunity to play a sport because of their ""C"" that's no reason to take away their dream. What if they want to become a professional swimmer? You're just going cut down their dream tree just because of a ""c'? ",Position,Effective,,,
+bf086f9911f6,0029F4D19C3F,"I have a ""C"" in math, and swim is coming up-you're just going to take away my chances to beat my times from last year? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+29c6940020f4,0029F4D19C3F,"I could grow up and become something amazing and thank you one day for the opportunity of being able to swim, but now you have taken my-and other swimmers ""the ride away"". I am appalled. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25595a7b67e6,0029F4D19C3F,I know if you do intend to proceed in changing the policy we students will try to get better grades to play the sport ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3a2aed3ddab0,0029F4D19C3F,but not every kid has a GPA of 4.0 ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+975a64b41a45,0029F4D19C3F,. So their for i propose my idea to keep the policy that you just have to have a 2.0! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43319cdeceb1,0029F4D19C3F,"Seriously, as my 6th grade teacher told me, ""something is better than nothing"". Sure you want us to have good grades but us kids,(teens) want to be involved in school activities but with or with out good grades i think if they strive hard enough they deserve the right to be involved ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+394d2d1f93c0,0029F4D19C3F,"i hope you rethink about changing the schools policy so that students MAY participate in sports and other activities even if we have a ""C"" average. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d06b75c7b28c,0045BE2791A2,I agree 100% with you. i think in order to be on a team sport you will have to have you grade up to a B ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e3b8c201cc55,0045BE2791A2,I think that because its not fair to the teachers if all you think about is sports and your grades are going down in school but you are doing sports. That telling the teachers you just don't care. Also i think its unfair to the other students that you are on the soccer team but have grades that are failing and you miss practice all the time because you have detention. Its fair do have the honor students play for are school even if there not the best in the school. Also its unfair to you. You will have bad grades but do well in sports ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26d08dd7550c,0045BE2791A2,You should do a activity i agree with that but only if your grades are high. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+277225effef5,0045BE2791A2,So that's why i think its important school before sports. and have an A or B for grades so you can do sports ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+60a02863cf9f,004AC288D833,Our school should have a community center. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+eed686192671,004AC288D833,"The reasons why, are so students can learn what our community needs, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d78527633e2,004AC288D833,how to make our community better place ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fd466124795,004AC288D833,why is community important for students to know ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c2307c6a771f,004AC288D833,Students think community center takes their time away. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d52be0c18c33,004AC288D833,but they have to learn what our community needs. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4131e01db80a,004AC288D833,"students will participate in a group of students making a list what our community needs, therefore students will learn what our community needs! students will present their list of things our community needs ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c8c93ad324e,004AC288D833,due to that students will be giving extra credit for the ones who have low grades! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed5b9628d921,004AC288D833,Some students don't participate because their friends say its waste of time. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a3f828f4e957,004AC288D833,it would not be waste of time when you get to know how our community can be a better place for us. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9d88289531df,004AC288D833,"students should know that the program is about our own lives, because if our community is bad well our lives are going to be bad. due to that students will want to participate and will want to make our community a better place for us. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2d42d2567275,004AC288D833,"some student might say why is the community important anyways, were fine nothing is wrong. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+edca5bf3e175,004AC288D833,"but when get to know what our community is, they would want to know about and would want to participate and know why is our community important ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6a5f061520ff,004AC288D833,tudents will receive a good grade if they participate in this community because is like an extra credit. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3bb39118fc5,004AC288D833,due to that their friends would want to enjoy the program because their friend told them about it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe6b309edcab,004AC288D833,"so principal the community center will be a great place for students to learn lots of things. so i guess this will be a good idea for our school. students will learn what our community needs, how to make our community a better place, and why is our community important! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+42c690f36acb,0056F3D261D5,"Millions of students from various cultures and locations have a common distaste for school. Many of them confidently argue that learning from home would be much more comfortable and conducive to their learning, for they would not be limited by the pressures of an academic atmosphere, which include intimidating teachers, competitive classmates, and uncomfortable classrooms. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+54f12c3091b5,0056F3D261D5,"Although many believe that students would benefit from attending classes from their homes, students would, in reality, be negatively affected by distance learning, ",Position,Effective,,,
+cad62ea8c66d,0056F3D261D5,for they would be deprived of social interactions ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6ec24c49c02d,0056F3D261D5,hands-on experiences ,Claim,Effective,,,
+76febeaf1ce0,0056F3D261D5,personalized guidance from teachers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d1a3d1cfb416,0056F3D261D5,"Through online schooling, students would not be allowed opportunities to interact with their peers, inhibiting the development of their social skills. Instead of collaborating with their classmates, students enrolled in online schools would have to complete assignments independently, limiting the sharing of ideas. Without the opportunity to share and discuss ideas, students would not be able to develop significant social skills, which include patience, open-mindedness, and the ability to peacefully collaborate.
+
+Without such skills, the students would be at a great disadvantage in future endeavors requiring teamwork, which are commonly presented throughout adulthood. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc6e59885325,0056F3D261D5,"Without physically attending school, students would exhibit delays in social development, severely impacting their future affairs. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+57e8ce2f5c36,0056F3D261D5,"Additionally, distance learning does not allow for the same hands-on experiences as physical schooling does. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+f230854169ca,0056F3D261D5,"In traditional science classes, for example, students participate in laboratory investigations regarding pertinent aspects of their studies. Through such activities, students are allowed to apply their knowledge and reasoning skills to create memorable understandings of the investigated topics.
+
+Online schools, however, cannot offer such activities, confining students to less involved and therefore less effective means of learning. Without interactive activities, students of online schools would not be able to obtain enduring understandings of learned concepts, ultimately limiting their educational horizons. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+70a4ed85afa4,0056F3D261D5,"Furthermore, online schooling deprives students of personalized experiences with instructors. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+33b2d686bd52,0056F3D261D5,"In physical schools, students can casually ask their teachers for assistance and instantaneously receive aid. Through online schooling, however, teachers are not as accessible, for students are only able to contact their instructors during a specific time frame. Without readily available guidance from an instructor, students would be unable to receive convenient, understandable explanations of troublesome topics. Without such guidance, content would be much more challenging to comprehend, ultimately impairing the students' academic capabilities. Due to the lack of access students would have to their teachers, online schooling would not be conducive to academic success. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+734d987be288,0056F3D261D5,"Overall, while online schooling would allow more comfort for the students, it would greatly inhibit their academic affairs, for they would not have access to crucial aspects of educational development, including social interaction, interactive experiences, and individualized relationships with educators. Without these fundamental components, students would not acquire lasting, solid educations, limiting their career possibilities and therefore the quality of their lives.
+
+To optimize the educational as well as general quality of future generations, physical schooling must be promoted rather than the attendance of school from home.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6e7b44cbc5e8,008C457C8E0B,"I believe you should use policy 1 allow students to bring there cell phones to school.
+
+As long as they use them at lunch or break or any free time during the school day and have them turned off before they come to class. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+aa65bd9d2db8,008C457C8E0B,the reason i chose this policy is because what if a student has an emergency during school like they get sick or get hurt something like that. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9541aa27d085,008C457C8E0B,"If you had policy 1 then they could call their parents and get taken home to be cared for i know there are plenty of times when i didn't feel well and i wanted to go home. I could have used my phone but i couldn't because we are not allowed to use our phones at school only after school.
+
+There is a possibility that some students wouldn't follow the rules about putting there phones away in class and teachers can take them away and they can get them at the end of class or the end of the day if this becomes a problem you can always consider changing the rules to policy 2 don't allow students to have there cell phones at all at school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+debd9bed0f33,008C457C8E0B,people at school also need to use there phones after school to have their parents pick them up or if there parents cant they wouldn't have any way of reaching them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b9534e220e7,008C457C8E0B,"that's after school but sometimes they need to tell them during school so if they send a text during class they could cheek it at lunch or after class. that's why i would prefer to use policy 1 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c3f772b9dba,008C457C8E0B,but you can always change it if it gets out of hand. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1f0c6468c89a,00B144412785,I would like disuss why changing up the way we voyte today is not as bad f an idea as it sounds. Changing to elections by a popular vote sounds like its in the peoples hands instead of juts casting out votes on the slate electors. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8f15137988b6,00B144412785,"Aren't we voting for our president. innstead of countting onn the electoral votes to hep out or, go against out favor, it'd be much more easier to just let the people vote. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+31fd5f31cc23,00B144412785,"The elctoral votes are utterly useless or unimportant,though. If there is ever happens to be a tie between the two candidates the electoral votes can help break it. It'd be less of a hassle to have the florida residents vote,directly, on someone besides the president. Less worring about if theyre going to win or not ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e92e27413589,00B144412785,"Now when you start to think about it the electoral college is just unfair an pretty outdated,if you ask me. Change doesn't sound that bad. All im trying to achive by writting this, is to gain actual control over who we're all voting for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fbc1cbde661,00B144412785,It's also not just what's completely wrong with the electoral college but how does it help in the first place? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+97ec8e436b45,00B144412785,"When you start analizing it, it really doens't help much. How much actual help can the lectora coellge make, in my defense not much. Why? Simple, its just 20-30 more votes and not many states have that much Hawaii has uop to 4 electoral votes, not much. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e176e16cff86,00B144412785,Voters should be alowed to directly vote for who they want to be president and not rely on the lectoral college.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c1ae72b8a0df,00E3F86E3E6A,I believe that we do not need to require that all students perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d0bdd0f8d933,00E3F86E3E6A,I believe that students that enjoy or want to perform community service may do as they like or choose. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97d935070887,00E3F86E3E6A,Some of the students believe that it should not be available at al ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a764c11a342b,00E3F86E3E6A,but i personally believe that it should be for those who want to ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+07517bf3ac2d,00E3F86E3E6A,It does take a long time out of the day but also it helps the community all together because that's what it is. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff2450499177,00E3F86E3E6A,my opinion is that we should have it for those who would like to participate in the activity. And we do not need to get rid of it all together. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e36cc75039a8,016A403802E8,That we have to do is get a B in sport or other activities ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7dd682ad1821,016A403802E8,"because all the student get a C for doing in sport for that because that not doing something or not doing the sport or other activities that why u get a C in sport or other activities that if u get B that mean you was doing something sport and other activities that you spouse to thing with sport and other activities. and i think that if u no t wherein the outfit of sport u need to play in sport for that and that what if u get a B for doing something that is good and some other activities but if u get a C that you not wherein the outfits or other activities that need to do in there for to get good grade of B and C. B is good and C it ok it kind good in for sport and other activities what u did in there for something .And it fun to be in sport and other activities and having fun with your family and friends that what u did at home then when the principal come to your class what u have P.E they come and see what u doing in class like doing sport and other activities so u can get
+
+B in that class room or they see u doing sport or other activities they might come in take a picture of u doing sport and other activities so u can get a B in that class if u did not do noting in that class room or u kind of did something u will get C for that and some other thing for sport there is a lot of sport and activities that u can do for that and let the activities that what the principal know about the sport and other activities so that ever thing make the policy change for the school so students can do some sports and activities for work and fun to be there that what the principal want so student to join there self for that there a lot of a sport and activities fun for them to have much fun doing a lot of sport and activities.     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e79617cabca1,016F1BA050BB,My opinion on driverless cars is that they dont have enough support and they are not something that is necessary for our society. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7ef145f28663,016F1BA050BB,"I dont think we need driverless cars, because they would cause too many problems and be too much work to take care of. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+86a23007b959,016F1BA050BB,"Driverless cars should not be a huge focus in our society, because we do not need them and we should be focusing on being more productive. We should not focus on driverless cars but rather on the safety of the cars and roads we have now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b63ae862ab9,016F1BA050BB,"Driverless cars could be more dangerous than the dangers we have now, revolving around the cars, traffic, and raidlroads all around us ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fd73fc75eda,016F1BA050BB,"We already have too many problems involving cars that we don't need to add any more. The people who are involved in creating the driverless cars should focus on making sure that the railroads are safe before trying to come up with anything new. I think that creating theese new cars is already to much work. It would involve creating the sensors, changing the breaks, and making new computer hardware and software. Theese things will not protect us from getting into accidents or having cars crashes which should be our main focus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b027bb8a0b44,016F1BA050BB,Even though they are taking away the concept of people having to drive the cars they are not preventing anything that could happen or that needs prevention. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5773a1bd3768,016F1BA050BB,People may think that having a driverless car would keep them from having to do the work themselves. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+76cc786358d3,016F1BA050BB,"Whn really what would happen is that they would have to pay more attention to everything around them, which would cause even more work. The cars would need to supervised more than they do now, because they would be moving and need us to take on more responsibility in controling the car. This could end up not working, because the cars could end up going out of our control. Which could cause more problems for us. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c1e0a5cfb705,017302FBA532,"Would you change history? Some people think that there some things that were made by our past Presidents should be changed. Such as our Electoral College, people say it should be changed to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d12a01e0dc8d,017302FBA532,So we shouldn't change history we should keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+97f84c49c319,017302FBA532,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A  majority of 270 electoral votes is requested to elect the president. Our states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c8c1fe21bd20,017302FBA532,Now think about this if we were to go with this changing thing look at how many people would lose thier job. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0269840cb1b7,017302FBA532,Therefore if the voting was by popular vote instead of by the Electoral College literally anybody could become President if there isn't anybody looking at it that knows what they are doing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a5bcd3ec27d,017302FBA532,"After the Presidential election,your governer prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respected electors. the Certificate shows that the winning Presidential candidate in your state and shows which will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in december of the election year. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0481ff9e1f4f,017302FBA532,"So without the Electoral College to make the decision of the President the governer can't make the ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" the other people and there respected electors won't get noticed for running. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11493e777fbc,017302FBA532,Other people think that we should change the Electoral College to the election by popular vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4d5d7473c5e4,017302FBA532,"They think that under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors , who in turn elect the president. For instance, if you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for whoever, you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to that person. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2299a37229fa,017302FBA532,"The Electoral College is widely regarded as anachronism,a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be[overuled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the part's nominee; however, it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. There are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigree; all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservaative reasons 1) Certainty of Outcome 2) Everyone's President 3) Swing States 4) Big States and 5)Avoid Run-Off Election.               ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2941bbbd40c,0195CE164102,"Well, me personally, i dont think its a good idea for a senator to change to that. I feel ike everyone should remain voting as usaul. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+1473ec6ab485,0195CE164102,If not this wouldnt feel like america anymore, ,Claim,Ineffective,,
+3cd559450d8d,0195CE164102,"America is all about freedom and the power of free speech....etc. This is what makes this country great; no dictator telling us what to do everyday. Without the power of voting this country would not feel the same. It wouldnt feel like america anymore. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+427e834222b2,0195CE164102,"Also, althoughs theres a lot of cons to this, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+153181359295,0195CE164102,really its just more worth it. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+0418a2a7ccfe,0195CE164102,It makes people feel impowered. Knowning that they're making an imoportant decision in life. It makes people feel free and glad that they live in america. Where you have a choice that yours and freedom at the palm of your hands. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+36e82096c173,0195CE164102,"Plus, sometimes people have more different opinions than others on voting ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+508df596c674,0195CE164102,You just cant count on some people that you dont know to choose for you. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6fa4b3f8afde,0195CE164102,The popular voting process doesnt seem bad at all but i dont think some people would enjoy that very much so.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d6ae30254eb0,01B3A57AB13D,"The advancement of technology has allowed for the development of mass communication and the globalization of information that continues to revolutionize modern society. During this modern age, society revolves around technological innovation which brings up the question of whether digitally advancing the education system to better replicate the technological world is in actuality beneficial to students. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+08575a5c3a65,01B3A57AB13D,The educational curriculum that incorporates virtual courses is providing a beneficial opportunity ,Position,Effective,,,
+ebabbf9f4c79,01B3A57AB13D,because students won't miss classes due to environmental or structural school issues ,Claim,Effective,,,
+64053386739c,01B3A57AB13D,they would save a lot of money ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0c71e528edee,01B3A57AB13D,their schedule would be more flexible to account for non-academic opportunities in life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3297cf8945e8,01B3A57AB13D,"Firstly, the primary reasons why schools get canceled and have to plan extra days within the school year is because of the fear of dangerous weather conditions that threatens the safety of the student body. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3f2179e8c74e,01B3A57AB13D,One of the main weather conditions that causes schools to cancel is heavy snow where ice would form on sidewalks and roads which creates hazardous conditions for students who walk to school and for school buses to drive on. The solution for weather cancellation issues is distance learning because students would benefit from having easy access to a mentor who would continue to educate them through the Internet while they are safely at home ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+c906ed414e8e,01B3A57AB13D,Another external issue that can cause harm or cancel school for students is when schools are under reconstruction which creates distractions and hazardous areas within the school that can threaten the safety of the student body. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eaee74845d37,01B3A57AB13D,Video conferencing would allow students to simply learn within the peaceful and safe environment of their home without without the fear of being injured or interrupted. Online courses ensures that students' learning process won't be delayed due to external factors to guarantee that students are properly prepared for final exams during the end of the school year. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d6206e21b69,01B3A57AB13D,"Secondly, students would benefit greatly from attending classes at home because they would save a lot money on transportation and on school lunch fees. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2214424d17fd,01B3A57AB13D,"School expenses would overall be reduced if students are able to attend online classes because some students face the unfortunate circumstance of not having a school bus assigned to their specific neighborhood which means that their parents' car mileage and car fuel are being rapidly used up in order for them to have a source of transportation to school. Online classes, in contrast, would simply require students to walk to a quiet environment within their home to ensure that they can maintain a focused mindset that is ready to learn through either reading an online textbook or participating in a video conference. Another expense when attending a physical school are the school lunches which are priced from one to five dollars depending on the county or school system and can accumulate to an enormous amount of money for middle class students who eat school lunches everyday. Distance learning, on the other hand, would allow students the ability to eat at home without the need for their parents to pay additional fees and students with a variety of health issues or allergies can also control the ingredients of the foods they are consuming to ensure that they are not deteriorating their health. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d29c5b47c43d,01B3A57AB13D,Contrary to what many believes ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+55125dd791a2,01B3A57AB13D,distance learning courses are beneficial for students whose family are on a budget because the affordability of online courses surpasses the attendance of a public school when accounting for all the additional taxes and fees that are put onto students who are attending a physical school. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+82e6d3d2e3a7,01B3A57AB13D,"Thirdly, students would have a more flexible schedule that would allow them to account for new job opportunities and volunteering hours. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+173baa2f5118,01B3A57AB13D,Private and public schools are forcing their students into a regime and strict schedule that takes up the majority of the mornings and afternoons of their students' life which disables them the ability to apply for internships or well paying part time jobs that occur during typical school hours. Online classes would allow students the ability to choose the time for their classes which forces students to practice prioritizing responsibilities and improve on their time management skill. An example of students who mostly work while attending school are college students who have to pay for their attendance and possibly even lodging within the college campus. Virtual classrooms would allow these students to build their work portfolio while also allowing students to return home after work and finish their academic assignments at home during nighttime. Another reason as to why online courses' flexible schedule is beneficial for students is because they would be able to have enough time during daylight hours to volunteer and help give back to their community which builds the morals and social connections with others in the community while also allowing the students to formally engage in academic studies at home after they've finished volunteering. Students would greatly benefit from online classes where a flexible schedule will allow students to have more time to engage in different experiences in life and formulate a more balanced lifestyle that isn't fully revolved around academics. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe53d42286bd,01B3A57AB13D,"In conclusion, distance learning is beneficial for students where it ensures that the students' education isn't hindered by uncontrollable weather conditions and it helps ease financial stress that low income and middle class families experience in a capitalist society. But most importantly, it allows students to have more independence which builds their character and further prepares them for the adult world where they are gradually gaining new responsibilities and experiences in life which they wouldn't be capable of experiencing without the flexible schedule that online courses allow. Virtual education is both effective and beneficial for the rising digital youths of America.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cccb4fc7a41b,01C53183305A,They are some Schools offer for Students to Lerning as option for Students from home ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9c33be34ce43,01C53183305A,They are many thinks you can't Lerning at home you can use by way of video or online. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e67dd3b0a9f3,01C53183305A,"First, Know in this world the technolgy availadle everywhere and you can use anytime you want to go online and attend the classes on the time. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d793c2efec3a,01C53183305A,"Secand, They are many student they have a lot of job or they have baby's or anything, They can't go to schools to lerning. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a3a96394ba4,01C53183305A,"So, they should take classes by way of online or video they can open the classes on the job or at home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2f950ef2943,01C53183305A,"Thrid, The student should behefit from deing and serios to do the work and homewark from home ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d9db66dca24,01C53183305A,because this is nice from them they make it for you easy to learning evry thing on the time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+edb01523cd37,01C53183305A,"Last, If you want to learn or take any thing in this life you can do any time you want and anywhere, You can take many classes at home, and finsh you'r education ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7b7f1dfbd52,01C53183305A,The Schools are the Bast houes in the world. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a77671cace5,01FE696E9CC2,"community service is a nice thing to do in our community, but I also feel that you should not make children who do not have the time, or do not want to do community service have to. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0741dee1e5b3,01FE696E9CC2,If a child is to do volunteer work I feel that the student should voluntarily volunteer not be forced to do something by a principal or a teacher ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25b856764fef,01FE696E9CC2,The student would probably not do a good job at what they were doing if they did not want to do it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+68df21864842,01FE696E9CC2,For example if a student was to tutor a child from an elementary school and they did not want to they might tell the elementary student the wrong answers on purpose because they do not want to be there. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf55dca90456,01FE696E9CC2,children in our school have the knowledge to know when community service should be done ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f4b32316587,01FE696E9CC2,As long as you have the proper tools to let the students at this school have a chance to do community service I believe that several of them will take that opportunity ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2046da5530f3,01FE696E9CC2,"I suggest that you put brochures in the office for tutoring sessions, trash pick up, paper routes, and any other form of community service you can think of, so that children will have the chance to do some community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0fb84fa0d14a,01FE696E9CC2,If not a lot of children in the school take this opportunity then I recommend making community service a requirement to go to this school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ac4de10d0140,0202B3446E2E,I would like to make a request. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c2d8cace1eaa,0202B3446E2E,Please abandon the idea of the electoral collage. thats a childs game. It is not fair game. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cb94346a93d1,0202B3446E2E,The electoral collage sends a certain number of electors to represent a state. Why not let an individual person represent his or her self? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09e4be395f19,0202B3446E2E,"it is obsurd that in Wyoming, a state of 500,000 voters, only get 55 represenntitives. It is with great agrivation that i ask you to make this change. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+001e6ee7115f,0202B3446E2E,"Furthermore, I would like to state that the electoral collage is outdated and irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c3c37383247,0202B3446E2E,There is no need for this great mess. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b9590dbca84,0202B3446E2E,The oposition states that the electoral collage is a nessesity for organization. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0ae944e21a53,0202B3446E2E,I personally beg to differ. I feel that voting for presidents would be more organized if we counted each individual vote from each individual person. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cf38df9d63fa,0202B3446E2E,I no longer want to vote for a slate of representitives when it comes time to vote for another president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d613a598468c,0202B3446E2E,"In addition, did you know that there were four presidents that had the mentality to abolish the electoral collage? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db22855c8458,0202B3446E2E,"These presidents, as stated in The Indefensible electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, by Bradford Plumer, were Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole. As well as the U.S. chamber of commerce and the AFL-CIO. they were all in favor of abolishing this horrid electoral collage! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dcc015495ae0,0202B3446E2E,AL Gore lost the presidency because of the electoral collage. He had 60% popularity vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+219a468fc285,0202B3446E2E,"Furthermore, I am ashamed to say that each state has its own amount of representitives. We should have a universal number of representitives for each state ",Claim,Effective,,,
+86cde6a62430,0202B3446E2E,because it is unfair that a president can lose a presidential election because a state that had an increaced amount of representitives ran against them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+442e56e8c8d6,0202B3446E2E,"I ask you to please vote against the electoral collage for the following three reasons:
+
+The representitives dont amount to the number of individuals that voted.
+
+The electoral collage is outdated and irrational
+
+Each state has an individual amount of representitives. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+86efb3a35c8b,0242719E9969,"Some kids might be fat and need to get out and do a sport to keep in shape.
+
+Also are athletics represents are school if all there are nerd's in athletics how are we exposed to look like a good school that you might not want to play against because there so good. then we might have students flocking here to join a awesome school and I would promis ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bdcbf283378b,0242719E9969,if a majority didn't get their grades up all you had to do was take them out of athletics and put them in a improvement class to help them in that subject. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cac06ff7bae3,0242719E9969,"If their grade is above a C in the class after six weeks they would have the right to get out if they wanted to.
+
+I know schools like to compete against other schools and show off whose better.
+
+you'd be hurting everyone's feelings toward competing. Or you could give athletics a whole six weeks to get their grade above a C and if we didn't then you could put that rule into effect. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+576bdf1f2a63,0242719E9969,I mean it's just down right unfair to do something like that to kids who love sports. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fbde87912b10,0242719E9969,"What if its their passion to be competing against people, drive that out of someone they may never have a passion again. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba63dbecc152,0242719E9969,If i was the principle I certainty wouldn't do that to a bunch of children that their passion was that high for sports. What about fat kids who don't get outside and only do when their at school do you won't to take away something that precious away from someone. The only thing that keeps them from getting fat all over again. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1aa9cb1e9169,028A2B1C73AF,"Is there really a new kind of life on mars. No! We are the only life in this universe. Plus if people lived on mars, how could they build such a huge amount of rock into a face so perfectly. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+33dc7b0fdd14,028A2B1C73AF,What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms ,Position,Adequate,,,
+21300b1d4543,028A2B1C73AF,Also back then they did not have that great of cameras but now they do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e250d671fddb,028A2B1C73AF,"With the new cameras, we could acually see that it was just a landform with cracks in it. The only reason people think it is a sign, is because of the shadows. It makes up its eyes, nose, and mouth. What, do you think they could make that with their bare hands? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a7c15c9a8c4e,028A2B1C73AF,"I don't think that there is people on mars, if there was , we would have probably found them all ready. I beleive that the [face] is not really a face. If you you beleive that there is, than thats fine but the real truth is that its not a face. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+68a8364cdfa6,02D889D32DF5,I think it is a bad idea to get a driverless. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+10707fd2f917,02D889D32DF5,I feel as if there would be to many people who just would blow off their responsibilitys as a safe driver. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bcb9401e1f5,02D889D32DF5,I thnk this because they wouldnt be driving the car the car would be driving itself and that would make people pay less attention. But dont get me wrong it would be a nice and amazing idea if we could all be responsible enough and pay attention so that we dont cause accidents. These cars would also help us from accidents because it would be smart enough to know when there is a stop sign or anything like that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f4071c205a0,02D889D32DF5,Some things that could ruin this idea would be if you thought about what if they mal-function and the car crashes and seriously hurts someone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d1b87300586,02D889D32DF5,Im sure that the cars saftey system as in air bags and other things would become one of the prime resources if it did mal-function. I feel as if more people would trust this car if there was a percent or something on how efficent this car would be. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b8dd7f96097,02D889D32DF5,Some other major problems would be the price range ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4ee665783ab,02D889D32DF5,i mean lets be serious no one wants to spend alot of money on a car that isnt worth it. I think if the car was a little cheaper and was alot more reliable on being able to pull over and stop without human work. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bd718e9a6ba8,02D889D32DF5,the part that is good about the car telling the driver to help is it would keep the drivers alot more on the road then they would be if it could stop and pull over all on its own ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3aef3d1bba4e,02D889D32DF5,One more problem i can see about this is there would be alot more texing on the road then is needed which would proabably cause alot more carelessness when people care riving to then would cause more accidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7191f52ca1ac,02F89B4E55CF,"In 2013, BMW announces the development of the ""Traffic Jam Assistant"". Been able to be comfortable and easier to drive but the driver has to be careful while driving. Be aware of everything that is going on the road; and we're the one who takes care of the car and not the car protecting us or feel more safer. I honestly think that we're the thinking more of the fashion or the style of the cars, and become more less careful on the protection of our own. We have to think more of the protection and make cars more safer to feel and comfortable. The driver is not going to feel safer, but it's also going to convince the driver to drive more safer. According to ""driverless cars are coming' people are going to focus on laws that is going to keep drivers,passengers,and pedestrians safe. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+102189f28a30,02F89B4E55CF,More cars are going to make and more style are going to make, but I also want to be safe when I'm in a car. ,Position,Ineffective,,
+7dc62d7dbdc9,0350A994E363,This brief letter is to show you my perspective on changing from the Electoral College to changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fb45668cb5f0,0350A994E363,I believe that the Electoral College should be changed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1410cdaefc8f,0350A994E363,"it's outdated, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0804b21c3eca,0350A994E363,"is very unfair, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3eae0292ba10,0350A994E363,is very misguiding ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+437e2eb0d58d,0350A994E363,The Electoral College should be changed because of how outdated it is. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+51d4724bd9ed,0350A994E363,The United States is just calling for an update. And a productive and benificial update. Just like the update of IOS 7 that the Apple company has recently made. The Electoral College is just not as productive as it used to be. This is because of issues such as population increase. Since there's more people the electoral votes are more prone to getting miscounted or may lead to other problems. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13b23e446af8,0350A994E363,"Not only is the Electoral College outdated, however, it's also causes way to many dillemas. Thankfully this only haopens every four years so we get a break from hearing about all the troubles the Electoral College has done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7aa12770d202,0350A994E363,the Electoral college is so unfair to voters because voters aren't even able to vote for thier candidate they have their electors vote for them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e6fdfc9870d,0350A994E363,"even though this happens on very rare occasions the electors have the power to vote for whoever they might choose. Which also causes stress on the voters, this is due to the unconfirmed assumption that they might not be voting for who they claim to be. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+175344905fc8,0350A994E363,"Aswell as the Electoral College being outdated, and unfair it's also irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+073806cf34af,0350A994E363,"Direct voting instead of using the outdated, unfair Electoral College voting would be a great update to the United States. Beniffiting the voters, electors, and the elected.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+04341297656e,036F8E1EF7A2,"The Electoral College has been around for a long time. The Electoral College is a process which consists of the counting of the electoral votes by Congress, meetings of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the selection of electors. It consists of a total of five hundred and eight electors and a majority of two hundred and seventy votes are required for presidency. Electors are choosen by the candidates political party. When voting for presidential elections, you are also voting for your candidates electors too.
+
+When the presidential elections are complete the govenor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" which lists all the candidates who ran for President and the names of all the electors and it also tells who won the presidency and the electors that will represent your state. The state conventions, state partys central comitee, and the presidential candidates, all pick the electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99fd1e0a381e,036F8E1EF7A2,Even though the electoral college is such and organized process of completing task ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+934f08fe8b08,036F8E1EF7A2,"it is a disaster factor, it is unfair against voters ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fa0fa8dad7a7,036F8E1EF7A2,The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to be choosen. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+81f027a23069,036F8E1EF7A2,It can be argued that the electoral college methods of choosing electors is bad ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d29f679c450d,036F8E1EF7A2,"Obama is the president of the United States. Romney is a republican that went against Obama in the presidential election of 2012. Obama had a plurality against Romney, meaning he recieved more votes than Romney but did not recieve a clear majority of votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+48eca52ec17d,03CD4C5553A4,"The adrenalin that you receive from sports is both vigorous and thrilling. However, if students are prevented from doing the one thing they enjoy and are passionate about, it takes away from apart of their lives and persona ",Lead,Effective,,,
+589499068451,03CD4C5553A4,"Having a C average is still passing and that's what we should contemplate on, not a B average. If we eliminate the sport activity from the child it wont benefit them ",Position,Effective,,,
+ee930270f2d8,03CD4C5553A4,"This would only lower their self esteem, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+32364693d03c,03CD4C5553A4,cause them to be less healthy ,Claim,Effective,,,
+665813ed3899,03CD4C5553A4,make them believe they wont be successful without playing the sport they love. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+91d69a0cc8d5,03CD4C5553A4,Self esteem is a problem in most of our generation's children. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5095bfbe1dbd,03CD4C5553A4,"They worry about their self image and what people think. However, while playing a sport they are engaged in something they love and they are no longer fixated on what people think about them. When children enter a sport they require practice and getting in shape. So, if a student is out of shape and has insecurities they work that extra lard off by entering a sport. Their grade should not be the reason to if they can participate in a sport or not. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a1cfb84be4f5,03CD4C5553A4,"Also, our school offers an excellent class called health. Moreover, they tell us that we should exercise because it helps us in the long run. But, if we take that away because of grades the kids may become more lethargic and not being able to even keep up with a C average! The effects would make the child's grade lower and possibly their status as a student would drop also. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2823a8d39a6f,03CD4C5553A4,Teachers say well if we keep on letting them play their sport then they wont try to keep their grades up at all ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+19ff303468cf,03CD4C5553A4,"No, that is not entirely true. A way to fix this predicament is to have consequences and tutors. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+4c828d96fe4b,03CD4C5553A4,"For example, if a basketball player receives a 65 on a test. Tell them that they can't start their next game unless they can pull it back up. Also, if you have tutors ( especially for the ones who struggle in math) it could help then bring their grades up to a B and possibly an A. These kids don't purposely try not to accomplish As its just hard for them to do it. All they need is a push. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d645b955603,03CD4C5553A4,"Some students know that they are exceedingly well at playing their sport. But, on the other hand, they know that they do not achieve so much academically. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+94721e3da386,03CD4C5553A4,"So, they aspire to do well in a sport and when that is taken away from them based on how they perform in class they believe they wont be successful in life and if they think that way then they most likely wont try to be. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7177048e3654,03CD4C5553A4,"For instance my friend, RELATIVE_NAME, was the best football player I knew. Just by the looks of him, he was destined for greatness. However, his school followed the policy to where people who were involved with sports and activities had to have a B average. Well, RELATIVE_NAME wasn't the sharpest tool in the shed and could only keep up with a C average so he had to be kicked off the team. Unfortunately, now he can't even keep his grades up to a D and has failed a grade. And, this was all because he was snatched away from the one thing he loved. Now, he doesn't even care what his grades are because he knows that he wont be able to play foot ball. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+916f3396980a,03CD4C5553A4,"Sports and activities are a passion for people that runs through their veins like nobody's business. So, what would be the benefit of the school taking that away? Nothing. Children get involved in activities because they love it and they would rather do nothing else. If we strip them from that then what else do they have to cause them to be ambitious in life? It's hard to tell but we know they wont have a passion. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7489455a30dc,03CECCDBCC09,I dissagree with the fact that the state wants to keep favor of electoral college. I think they should change the way the whole election is set up by using popular vote for the presedent of the united states ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a07519140e59,03CECCDBCC09,To me the election should be based on what the people wants and what they think is best not on electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ce9bd712e9c,03CECCDBCC09,Electoral vote is also unfair to the people who vote because of the winner-takes-all system is certain states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+03fc5efc07eb,03CECCDBCC09,"Yes richard nixon, jimmy carter, bob dole, the u. s chamber of commerce, and the AFL-CIO agreed on electoral college but electoral college is when the voters vote for the state electors who the vote for president. there is an arguement called the disaster factor also and thats the single best argument against the electoral college. Thats why popular vote for president is better than electoral because there is a better possibility of the majority of people winning. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+36ab3244abc2,03CECCDBCC09,"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational it officail !!!. Also arguments against direct elections are apurious at best. Bob dole was right:abolish the electoral college.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+53b7a3042a9e,0424AC66B7C7,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" there are different sides and reactions to driverless cars. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5356312fb1c5,0424AC66B7C7,Personally I think that driverless cars are a bad idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cfb88c349a0d,0424AC66B7C7,cause crashesand problems ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cfbc4ea0fe4,0424AC66B7C7,costs lots of money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf5a423d59b9,0424AC66B7C7,need more modifications. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b813f35d305,0424AC66B7C7,Driverless cars can cause alot of crashes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7eaf91d7d63d,0424AC66B7C7,"if it is a contructions zone, the car does not knowhow to get through it or manuver around it. A problem that might happen is you can tell the car where you want to go but it might not take you there. That can be a dangerous situation. If you have a driverless car, the driver is not going to pay attention to the road at al, so if something does happen in the car, the driver will not be paying attention enough to take control of the car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+918d249c2d1e,0424AC66B7C7,Making these cars cost losts of money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e729db14bf9f,0424AC66B7C7,"all the sensors you have to put on them. Not just the sensors, but you have to get someone to install the sensors. And if the car malfunctions then the car company will face alot of court issues which also costs alot of money. Spending all this money on making the cars will not be worth it all when people come to complain or get hurt by the car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bc436736baa,0424AC66B7C7,The driverless cars need more modifications ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5532d9f9a6c5,0424AC66B7C7,they are not completely driverless. You still need the driver to assist the car. If you need the driver its not a driverless car because you still need someone to take the wheel when certain points come along the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93f5fa55032c,0424AC66B7C7,"This articke shows me that driverless cars are an bad idea. Too much money, more modificatio, and crashes are only a little bit of the priorieties that need to be ficed with driverless cars. When these get fixed then driverless cars may be a better idea, but until then they need to try to fix these issues.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f1c11de2e88d,0428DEB82659,Chossing our President so be done by popular vote and the electoral college. This will allow citizens who are involed with the congress and who are not involeve to have equal say on who is president. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c86398fb9e09,0428DEB82659,So people might say that getting rid of the electoral college is the way to go because the congress have no say in the voting. The congress is part of the political system and they should be able to have the final say on who is President. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+792557e429d2,0428DEB82659,The Electoral College is a process where selected elector come together and vote for President and Vice President. It consist of 538 electors and majority vote (270) is required to elect the presient ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+536f4cea747b,0428DEB82659,With the electoral college there is a certainty of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b0bbc4f2f08,0428DEB82659,"It is possible to have a tiwe because there is an even number (538) of electors, But for a tie to happen is very unlikly. (source 3). Having no tie will ensure that we have a Presidnet that a majority of the citizen and even non-citizens are happy with. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2262db89e2d9,0428DEB82659,"Also, the Electoral colllege requires a presidential candidate to have trans regiona, all arounf he country, appeal ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+40b30470cd34,0428DEB82659,"NO region north, south,east, or west has enough electoral vote to elect a president (source 3). This ensure that one reigion that ""favourites"" on candidate has the majority say. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5f5b3d26ed69,0428DEB82659,It is possible for the candidate with the most electoral votes not win the national vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e3fe9ed1888b,0428DEB82659,This incident is very unlikly to happen but in 2000 Gore had won the most popualr vote then Bush but had fever electoral votes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+650728081b63,0428DEB82659,The electoral college has been around for a long time. Many people think it is an out dated way for electing a presidnet and Vice president ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+459718ddda58,0428DEB82659,The electoral college has been a sucessful way to choose our presidnets in the past. The elctoral college avoids the problem of elections in ehich no canidat receives a majoirty of the popual votes. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3cc0b462b04a,0428DEB82659,Many argue that the electoral college method of slecting a president may turn off potenial voters. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eaebd3cf2627,0428DEB82659,But the people who do vote are people who wanr a express a political preference rather than people who want to think that their ine singal vote will decide the over-all winner of the election. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c363ad0c16b4,0428DEB82659,When chossing a president remember that your one vote will not have a great effect on who is president but the electoral college does. Having both popular vote and electoral college vote will allow all citizen to be involed in the slection of your presient. Getting rid of it my allow more of the non congress citizen to have more of a say. The congress is part of our country to and they should be able to vote the way they want to.   ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b125bcb03d76,043E9B5AFC5F,Do you know what the Electoral College is? It's a process that the founding fathers established in the Constitution as a compromise between election of President by a vote in Congress and election of President by popular vote of qualified citizens. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+3e63a3af1d78,043E9B5AFC5F,"I think that we should change the way we vote by changing to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. I feel that this is a good idea and a good way to vote, let me tell you why. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d20848a165cf,043E9B5AFC5F,It's a good idea because it benefits the public ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c3948c896c97,043E9B5AFC5F,everyone knows exactly what kind of impact they're making ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8a1d98d349ef,043E9B5AFC5F,it doesn't mess up the votes and or voting ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1d019264c497,043E9B5AFC5F,"The public wants to know exactly who and what they are voting for, they want to know exactly what their vote means to the election. More than half of the time they don't notice what kind of an impact a vote can make or what exactly they are voting for. Also when they do elect a President, the end up getting mad over their finances or taxes because the President trhat they voted for affected it in a negative way. They wanted to elect him because they wanted a better economy, to benefit them, not to restrict them from not having what they want. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+59d0e6cec108,043E9B5AFC5F,"We all don't want to vote and not know what kind of impact our vote can make. We want to know that we can make a difference on who we're voting for, or who we vote for. They want to know and be sure if they vote for lets say ""Billy Henderson"" that he will lower gas prices and boost the economy, make this world a better place and help all the needy, instead of ""Robert Metinguey"" who will maybe to this and maybe do that. We want to know for sure what we're voting on and how much of a difference it can make. Not to be worried about if it won't happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7850161a1635,043E9B5AFC5F,"According to the Gallup pole in the 2,000, taken shortly after Al Gore, thanks to the quirks of the electoral college, won the popluar vote but lost the presidency. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This is what im talking about people. People are losing their elections due to the electoral college. One of the major reasons of why people are wanting a change, there should be no electoral college, only a popular vote for the election. We all want a better Government. I only there was a better way to vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5ddad2b8ef96,043E9B5AFC5F,"Well, there you have it. My reasons are final. I feel that we should change the voting process because it would benefit the public, so everyone can know exactly what kind of impact they're making and so it does not mess up the voting process. Don't do it for the government. Do it for your own sake. If you wanna make a difference, be on my side, and we can. Together. Now my only question to you is, are you willing to make a difference?            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d1c9c588c476,46703375973,I don't think that it is a good idea to change the grade average to a B. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a86e9ff3bfd,46703375973,"A C is a passing grade, and trying to keep up a grade B while playing sports could sometimes be really hard. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c77d324ec989,46703375973,"Kids have a lot to do and maybe going through some rough times, and are already trying there best to keep up with a grade c. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f9f5e7e7fb5,46703375973,"it is really hard to keep up with your grades, and school and other important things students may have to do outside of school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+99aaaaf72a24,46703375973,"maybe they have a job, friends, family, personal things they are dealing with or have to do, and making that change will push them over the edge and stop them from playing. Also a C is a passing grade so the students are passing their classes and keeping up with school and everything else while playing a sport they love, so there isn't really any need to change the grade average. It is just unfair to the students. It is just too much for the kids to handle. it will hurt them not help them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a3b71c5b74e2,46703375973,the best part about school besides friends is sports. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fce43c71dce0,46703375973,"To some kids sports is the best and most important part to them. They represent the school by playing to win and have fun. the school is fine the way it is so why make a change. Change is not always a good thing, it will just make everything harder and worse. You raising the grade just keeps the kids from doing what they love to do. they cant keep up with everything all at once. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a286a79b426,46703375973,what's the point? everything is fine just the way it i. why change it? ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8f4e8a5b4c72,46703375973,"the students are keeping up their grade, and when their grade is getting lower (to a low c) the coach talks to them, saying that they better be careful. it scares the students to be getting a c because that's the boundary line. they shoot for getting an A or B anyways so it wont make a difference. It is just going to scare the kids. Also by changing the grade average it is most likely going to bring down the team numbers. Not as many kids are going to try out because of that. changing even just a little thing makes a big difference, and changing this will make even a bigger difference. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+968514a54cb0,46703375973,"there is no need to change the grade average to a B. There is no point to it. The team and kids are doing fine just the way it is and changing the grade average will make a big difference, and not in a good way. kids will stop trying out because there is just too much going on and they cant keep up. plus a C is a passing grade and students want to get a higher grade then that because its risky at a C itself. some kids are already struggling and raising the grade will just make it harder. Leave the average the way it is because i could guarantee you that it will not be a good idea. you don't know what kids have to do after school, or go through, and if the students and teachers and coaches are happy then what is the harm? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9f25d19af48c,0471B0EB1919,The Electoral vote should be converted to election by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb75e7c63abc,0471B0EB1919,"By using popular vote, the majority of voters will be satisfied when it comes to the election of the president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf7783fb3d43,0471B0EB1919,"When you use the Electoral College System, you dont vote for the president of your choice, you're voting for the how ever many representitives that pleged for them ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e677733c9d2f,0471B0EB1919,"“Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now.”
+
+(Source 2 Paragraph 9)
+
+Even the voters would perfer majority rule ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67a0d404d1c7,0471B0EB1919,"The map in
+
+Source 3 shows that some states have more representitives then others ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b76006b3c8bf,0471B0EB1919,Thus meaning that many states were treated unfair when it came to elections because they didnt have many votes to represent them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee672580b296,0471B0EB1919,"“Especially during the 2000 campaign. Seventeen states did not recieve any candidatesat all.”
+
+(Source 2 Paragraph 13)
+
+If some states dont get represented the people wont be happy. If the people arent happy then hectic will end up breaking out. As well as if the people arent happy, then they wont do what they are told because they are unhappy with it. People would like to vote to express their political prefrence more so then thinking a single vote could decide an election. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25337ff93420,0471B0EB1919,"In conclusion, the citicens of the United States would be more appreciated if they got to choose themself and put their own political input in on who became the president. Then so, Americans will be happy and riots, political protests, and/or hectic will not break out in the United States of America.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1154e0d6ac9b,048CE592752A,Community service is something that most people that like to help clean up there neighborhood do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47c84db1f8d5,048CE592752A,some people prefer to spend there time doing thing that help there self. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c699f2606340,048CE592752A,Some times community is for people that do things wrong and expect to get away with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+248cb191f44c,048CE592752A,"So there county make them do so many hours of community service to pay off debit. I think that is why some people choose not to do community service. so other people shouldn't force this on them if they haven't done anything wrong, they just choose not to do community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0af3497c076e,048CE592752A,It may also be that they have a busy schedule and can't make time to do community service at that point in time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c0e0a579b72,048CE592752A,Maybe if you tried other ways of asking people to volunteer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4360188e074,048CE592752A,"like putting a sign up sheet in the main office or forming a pto to help clean up. showing the importance of some things can change peoples minds on how they look at something. Also showing someone how good it feels to do something good for some one else in there neighborhood, can change their minds about doing something like community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce38e80bcf5b,048CE592752A,"In my opinion community service helps every body if its teaching them that they shouldn't do bad things or helping clean up the earth. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3859a1683c80,048CE592752A,Community service is a good thing that shouldn't be looked at like a punishment. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+872712b21878,048CE592752A,so show them that just because your doing his doesn't mean your in trouble it just mean you like help taking care of your neighborhood. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7d0c3417f78,048CE592752A,So basically you shouldn't require it but give other choices and ways of showing how important it can be to do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+56bd923327f7,04ACF5873DE9,"Is the Face on Mars created by an alien? No, the Face on Mars was not created by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0893cd4d68d5,04ACF5873DE9,The Face on Mars is a natural landform. The Face on Mars was not created by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b4fce9021af,04ACF5873DE9,because mission controllers checked twice ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f2a9b3709a9,04ACF5873DE9,Scientist figure it's a Martian mesa ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe1ed3683d26,04ACF5873DE9,NASA was looking for Viking 2. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+55812df5cbd4,04ACF5873DE9,Mission controllers checked twice to make sure it wasn't created by aliens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9d50e14da58,04ACF5873DE9,"In the article the author states, the first time we took pictures of the Face we had to go through clouds, skeptics thought that alien markings were hidden by haze. The author also states, ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, so, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" These two details prove that mission controllers checked twice to make sure that the Face on Mars was not created by aliens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e0c785c362d,04ACF5873DE9,Scientist figured it's a martian mesa ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a5971e482ae,04ACF5873DE9,"In the text the author claims, ""Scientists figured it was just another martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egytpioan Pharaoh."" The author also says, ""A lava dome takes the fror of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the Face on Mars."" These two details prove that the scientist figured it was a martian mesa. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b369bb85712,04ACF5873DE9,NASA was looking for Viking 2 so they could find Viking 1's sister ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fb342c81522c,04ACF5873DE9,"In the passages the author states, 25 years ago NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars snapping pictures looking for Viking 2, when it spotted the human face 2 miles big staring back at the camera. The author also says, ""huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.""
+
+These details prove that NASA was looking for Viking 2, so they could find Viking 1's sister. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afdf2c08c545,04ACF5873DE9,"The Face on Mars was not created by aliens, it is a natural landform. The Face on Mars was not created because mission controllers checked twice, Scientist figure it's a Martian mesa, and NASA was looking for Viking 2. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5fe05b1a7688,04C632140E83,My friends do not like community service they think it is a waste of time and energy. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa5f16bd2e10,04C632140E83,I say that they shouldn't have to do community service if they don't want to. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bdd5ede1bbca,04C632140E83,community service is about giving and doing in your free time not in time given to you or being forced to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+417bc53cce38,04C632140E83,"then they do the job with a frown and a groan for example say my friend OTHER_NAME is helping the elderly with OTHER_NAME.
+
+OTHER_NAME likes doing this so he helps during school after school and during the community service class he happily does it with a smile on his face. OTHER_NAME will only do this if he has to and, during this job he will moan groan talk back and slack off. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+030d8a196950,04C632140E83,If you warn him to be good and not make noise he will think stuff in his head. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6186336868df,04C632140E83,I ask you not to make this mandatory not just for me and my friends but for the school let this be extracurricular for character education or something along those lines. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3c786f80c3ff,04D4F9F350F6,Have you ever take classes online? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a2628d456b58,04D4F9F350F6,Here is my opinion about it: I do not think that students get benefit by studying in this way ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fc41f00ede8d,04D4F9F350F6,"because is not the same as if the student go to school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd5a7b97e40b,04D4F9F350F6,because in online classes there is no teacher to explain you clearly how to do the work that you are studying. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a44827950c7e,04D4F9F350F6,"For example: I'm taking one class online and is not the same as if I take it in my school, because like I said there's no teacher to explain it to me how to do it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e27c7cd87d69,04D4F9F350F6,"Also, I have some friends and they are taking classes online either and they say that it's a little bit difficult for them understand those classes, because there is no one to teach them how to do what they have to do. They have to figure it out (teach themselves)
+
+how to do their works. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54892cd77fdf,04D4F9F350F6,"This could be a disadvantage because people who go to school could know more things that you know because of that.
+
+Some people unfortunate have to take this classes because they have some obstacles. Maybe they work, they missed that class in the past, or they just want to take it online. Online classes use to be easier than regular classes that's why some people take them. I did not take because of that. I take it because I missed that classes. Take regular classes will always be the best way to learn a lot about some subject, because you will have your teacher explaining to you how to do some things and stuff. Classes online will always be a good option but not as much as regular classes are. People always say that classes online are good, but that they do not feel that learn enough. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+342a2946165c,04D4F9F350F6,"In conclusion classes online could be good,but not that good. Is a good option for people who work during the day and they can take them during the night or conversely. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+91f32234c1f2,04D653441263,"Online education has always been a controversial subject with the risk of not understanding the material, and students getting answers from their peers most of the popluation seem to be against the possibility. However, I believe there are new ways to look at the subject. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+00544f9fb25c,04D653441263,The pros for online education are very proactive to the needed change in the school system ,Position,Effective,,,
+100368970cf0,04D653441263,"flexibility, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b35fb9f4b45d,04D653441263,time management ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a939d1bc1c93,04D653441263,"mental health. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+b86b53a4cf29,04D653441263,"As a current student at a in person educational school, I have first-hand experience on how time consuming school may 6 be. An online education means that you are being told what you need to have done here before a certain time and, how you are expected to do so. It throws away the possibility of time consuming dialogue that students may have with other students or the teachers getting off topic with a personal story. Doing these little things that happen frequently can turn an 8 hour system into 3 hours. In the mist of giving these students 5 more hours in the day that is 5 more hours for students to work, hang out with friends, do chores and etc. These little things let us teenagers be teenagers just a little while longer. Adding to things such as, the employment rate, students taking college classes during high school, and the amount of teens volunteering. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0247efe6e76d,04D653441263,It gives teen the ability to be more flexible with their lives which is what we should strive for. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d5f2ab5f13e2,04D653441263,"Secondly, When giving a student their own time to finish their work and nothing but the guilt of not getting a good grade being their motivation, there will always linger the question of ""Will they get it done?"". To that I asked, is school not meant to teach us the tools we need to survive the ""adult world""? As teenagers we are always told to learn the importance of time management before we get into our careers and even college. However, there are no courses for these types of things but, instead we are expected to learn them through first-hand experience and natural growth. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+52d6fb1cab4b,04D653441263,"This online school will teach students their obvious subjects such as Math, English and etc but they will subconsciously teach the importance of time management. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e748406e22a6,04D653441263,"Students will be expected to finish these lessons on their own because, if a teens prefers to do their work early in the morning in about 2-3 hours does it matter that they're possible hanging with their friends all night. These helps us teens understand the importance of time management without throwing it in their face they subconsciously come to that conclusion on their own. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e45850f4f965,04D653441263,"Lastly, the importance of mental health in the education system is lacking and to be quite blunt is part of the problem. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cfa83b19db02,04D653441263,"Most, adults may argue that this is a false narrative because of the of outlets that the education system may offer to students. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9c61280b877d,04D653441263,"However, my question is ""Do these outlets reach out and succeeded to out way the bullying and stress of a normal public school?""
+
+because the answer is ""No."". ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1d24bd354340,04D653441263,"As student at a public school the amount of work that is pilled on and the emotional stress of bullying enough to fall into depression. However, these problem turn into other problems for example, as a teenager your friends become and big part of your life in terms of what makes you happiest. What the current education system fails to realize is that two days of seven are not enough to truly cherish your time. Online school eliminates the possibility of those students who are to busy because of school work and because of it have no social life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+abb3fa9db0bb,04D653441263,"To concluded, Online school is and will most likely always be a controversial topic for as long as those who have been to in person school are around. However, I believe it's a matter of noticing that the pros of this new way of thinking out way the cons. These truly serious issues are being over looked because our older generation are extremely set on the mind-set that all generations need to grown up as they did. Let's look to innvoatote new ways.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+31980a8a5b64,04DEFB0B11C5,The united states has this ellection system called the electoral collage. The electoral collage is a system of voting for verious comities. When the founding fathers of The united states made the constitution the electoral collage was a part of it ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+eb6a4a5868a1,04DEFB0B11C5,Why would any one want to change the electoral collage because i would like to know. In my oppinion in is the best thing i know of for a working government ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d0f4bb08177b,04DEFB0B11C5,"Over the years there has been a larg number of amendments to the constitution, but that was to adjust it to the chang in todays tecnology. Under the 23rd amendment of the constitution, the District of columbia is theated like a state for purposes of the Electoral collage.
+
+The electoral collage consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electorsvotes is required to elect the President. Most states have a ""winner-take -all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. So another words whoever gets the most votes wins but the odds are which ever side has the larger amount of people voting republican or democrat is normaly who wins. because if your a republican your most likly to vote democrat. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd59bb6a7a03,04DEFB0B11C5,Everything that is rong with the electoral collage ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+15c9fe0f67d1,04DEFB0B11C5,"Under the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for Kerry, you'd vote for slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+61e10912920a,04F277F6562D,"Was the Face on Mars really created by Aliens? Or was it just a very unusual rock formation, even for Mars? Well, the answer is no, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d34d6cead52a,04F277F6562D,it was just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+947b00712c09,04F277F6562D,"This giant rock formation, which stretches for about two miles from end to end, isn't uncommon at all. Actually, it is a mesa which just has shadows that cast on it a certain way, which makes it look exactly like a face. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7a16d43a3eed,04F277F6562D,"I know what you might be thinking. How could it only be a natural landform? It looks exactly like a face, so it must have been created by something or someone. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6b6f9a792dbc,04F277F6562D,"Well, there are actually plenty of reasons why it is just a normal landform with unusual shadows. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+afc8ddabed97,04F277F6562D,"For example, the Face was found in an area of Mars called Cydonia. Cydonia is actually known for its common Martian Mesas. This means that it isn't too shocking that it is natural. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d86ab6a9e27,04F277F6562D,"Don't get me wrong, a face is a pretty rare and unusual thing for a mesa to look like. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45873a137ede,04F277F6562D,"Even though this one has strange shadows that give it features of a face, it is still just a mesa. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5ac94a516b16,04F277F6562D,"After multiple pictures that were taken of the Face, the one taken on April 5, 1998 was the first one to fully reveal that the Face was indeed just a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c34c8707005,04F277F6562D,"Even though the picture clearly showed that the Face wasn't a man-made structure, ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+88137d086bb6,04F277F6562D,"some people still weren't convinced. They said that the picture was taken on a cloudy winter day, so many skeptics thought that maybe there were alien markings that were just hidden by haze. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5f940e46cda9,04F277F6562D,"No matter what people believed after they saw the picture taken in 1998, the picture taken on April 8, 2001 was the one that proved to the skeptics that the Face was a naturally occurring landform. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+34937b2531dc,04F277F6562D,"Since the picture was taken on a cloudless day the next time around, there were no excuses for those who thought the Face was made by aliens. This picture actually showed that the Face was a martian, and it was about the same size as a butte or a mesa. Buttes and mesas are landforms that are commonly found in the western regions of the United States. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc1979a0c9c1,04F277F6562D,"There you have it. The Face sadly wasn't built by aliens, it was just a natural landform that happened to have some pretty neat features to it due to shadows. There is no way around it, because the pictures don't lie. It is even more obvious that it is a landform because ones just like it exist on Earth! Even though it would've been very interesting for it to have been actually created by aliens, it was just a natural landform in the end. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+32c97715045b,051C3A22AEE0,I think that the online or video coferencing wounld not benefit high school student ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4c0619d503c2,051C3A22AEE0,because they many pros and con. pros student can work on thier own ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a7a7ccc9c7f,051C3A22AEE0,sudent can work on home cons ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+94e0d44b4089,051C3A22AEE0,Not all student have a acces to the internet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77d6daac5c8e,051C3A22AEE0,student cannot understand the assessment it make it not English speaker to understand student cannot benefit for attend classes from house ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33dfb35e5883,051C3A22AEE0,because take classes from home cannot improve the student educated. In the school class student are alllow to work with group and work with teacher ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9274718af79c,051C3A22AEE0,"home school can cause distraction, worries ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+edf73b1ead20,051C3A22AEE0,For Example when you're work or take exam and your family member call you to do something for her. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b339ee882ccb,051C3A22AEE0,in online class you don't learn lots of thing. but in school classes you learn of thing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a32244094c76,052136F20DD1,Isn't it crazy that a face on Mars would be created by aliens? NASA sure seems to think it is. Many sciensts have discovered it's a natural landform. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+303d3bb03a53,052136F20DD1,The face on Mars is indeed a natural landfom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6e620926d49f,052136F20DD1,NASA has had the Mars Global Survayor fly over Cydonia and take pictures to prove it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37da6189a8d2,052136F20DD1,"Jim Garvin has said,""We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot of it."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7a0ad8be533,052136F20DD1,Many people will say that the face on Mars was created by previous creatures living there ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cd723ee80980,052136F20DD1,"The planet humans live on, Earth, even has landforms that humans didnt make that just happen to look like faces, As Garvin says,""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b7264285eee,052136F20DD1,"The face on Mars is nothing but land that has been formed in the shape of a face. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2c112192be11,052136F20DD1,"The face on Mars has been proven to be a landform. They have taken pictures, the scientists have studied it, and all these studies have proved that the face is just land. In conclusion, sometimes things aren't as they seem ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb22d855e1ed,053B8755A4FB,"You have listed two possible policies about cell phones at school. The issue is common among all schools, considering that children are texting in class. You have presented two very common ideas about cell phone usage; the first allows students to use their cell phones during lunch and other free times, while your second suggests banning students from having phones at school. While both ideas can be considered good, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3c4521b007ed,053B8755A4FB,I personally believe that your first idea is the better of your suggestions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c4d2cd3bc343,053B8755A4FB,"If you ban the use of cell phones at school, it cannot stop the students from bringing them. You can stop children from using their phones on paper, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ffc0bf1aaf9a,053B8755A4FB,this would not stop them from using them. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+21507f983c36,053B8755A4FB,"They could take out and use their phones when teachers are not watching, and use them without being noticed. And when somebody gets caught, they just get angry at the school and have their parents come up to the school to get back the confiscated phone. This will give you no progress, as students would still use their phones in class and just get them taken away. Even if they have the chance of getting caught, they would still text or call somebody if they felt that it was something important. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1f9a6499408a,053B8755A4FB,"also, students would have to use a school phone to contact a parent if they are sick or forgot something, and not all teachers allow students to use class phones. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b0ca384065ff,053B8755A4FB,"if they do, a sick person might use the class phone, allowing the germs to spread, possibly putting other students at harm of disease. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fdc53ffab564,053B8755A4FB,"If students are allowed to use phones some point in the day, then they might not use them as often in class. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+46ee1c4073be,053B8755A4FB,"Students could then contact friends if they do not have the same free time as them, and are able to contact a parent or guardian if they are sick. This will cut down on students using class phones, and will help stop texting going on in class. If they believe they have the liberty to text during free times and lunch period, then they will be less likely to text in class. By giving them freedom, you are helping yourself because they are less likely to break the rules if they have something to tell their friends or family and they do not need to break the school rules to tell them really quickly. They would have time to do and say whatever they wanted to friends and family, and that would cut down on students getting in trouble during class. It would also reduce the amount of parents that have to come to school with complaints and to retrieve the item that was taken away. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c7ef1e6f4d5,053B8755A4FB,"This will allow students to fell as if they more freedom, treating them like adults. If they feel they are treated like a grown person, they might start to act like one. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b5ed0da05bc7,053B8755A4FB,"This could improve their studies if they stay more focused in class because they feel well respected. This could also help they pay attention more in class if they are not texting during the teachers lesson. The teacher can not always see if a student is texting, so the pupil could easily get away with it. During a free time, students would be able to get all of their important texts to their contacts, and be able to focus more in class. This will improve the grades of students, and help prevent students from being held back or failing a class. It could even keep kids out of trouble. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ce5eef7c691c,053B8755A4FB,"If a student gets bored after finishing their lunch or while outside, then they could mess around and get in trouble. But if they were allowed the privilege of their phones, then they could avoid getting in by talking to their friends instead of goofing around. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c9876cae9c3,053B8755A4FB,"Over all, I believe that banning phones from school is a bad idea. None of the students would follow the rule, and they would just bring them to school and hide them. This will get zero progress, and will create no change in the school environment. If you let students text during free time, it could keep students from texting during class, and help them focus more. By distracting the students while they are outside or have free time, it could prevent them from doing something to get them in trouble. And less people would be angry. You would not have angry students or parents coming up to the school to take back a confiscated item, thus not having to bother with any angry people. This is where I stand on the policies, but the final decision is up to you. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3567f2e1d68a,053DA7D0417B,I do not agree with having an Electoral College for a few reasons that I can site with informational sources ,Position,Adequate,,,
+52457f8fc127,053DA7D0417B,"In a way, the Electoral College doesn't help with what the country, in a whole, thinks ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e8595735715,053DA7D0417B,I believe that everyone should vote even if they do not want to because it should make a difference but it really does not because of the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5daf11504f0,053DA7D0417B,"I do understand that the Electoral College is a process from my readings of
+
+What is the Electoral College.
+
+This process should be expanded to the states all across the U.S.A ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01ce89c05d5c,053DA7D0417B,I do not think that it is fair to make the Electoral College's votes more important than the citizens of the United States votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+54a9521228a3,053DA7D0417B,"These people are voting for the good of their country and they deserve to have the president that they desire, not just majority rules. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+545d0bc083c0,053DA7D0417B,"there are many, many issues with the Electoral College ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+610b1ef89f1d,053DA7D0417B,"It states, ""The American people should consider themselves licky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and thay those electors could always defy the will of people."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9390d36a1565,053DA7D0417B,"In other words, humans will be humans and they are capable of betraying others. There are many evil people in the world and the Electoral College does not realize that. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eec01095787a,053DA7D0417B,"Now, do you realize why I want the Electoral College gone? We live in a free country with rights to do certain things especially to vote. If we don't really do the voting, then what's the point?   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6bc6a7ac8b4c,0565752FDEEF,Developing driverless cars is an important part of the future of the automobile industry. Driverless cars will be safer and more reliable. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2bb49ad62a72,0565752FDEEF,"Self drive cars are the cars of the future because, they can brake, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cfca0d886186,0565752FDEEF,accelerate ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a3debcd98bff,0565752FDEEF,steer on their own. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b31acd1a4136,0565752FDEEF,Driverless cars being able to break and stop on their own would prevent car crashes from happening. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c103fd654510,0565752FDEEF,"This would save lives and prevent injury. The author states ""the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better responce and control than a human driver could manage alone."" This would allow cars to stop faster than humans could manage and to prevent cars from scidding and flipping. The author reffers to the advancements in the sensors that ""make driving safer"" would allow cars that can handle more tasks on their own. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1bc6db14809,0565752FDEEF,"Cars that accelerate on their own would prevent speeding, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7734457dfc48,0565752FDEEF,"which is a risky driving habit. If a car is able to accelerate on it's own it would allow trafic to move smothly with little frustration. The author states that ""The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph"". This is a long way from driving on the interstate, however it can be done. The author atates that Sebastion Thrun belives "" That technology has finnaly begun to catch up to the dream"" If technology keeps advancing we could have self driving cars in decades. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd3f841feffd,0565752FDEEF,Cars that can steer on their own would prevent a large portion of car crashes and other automobile accidents. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3429926e55fe,0565752FDEEF,"This would save lives, The author states ""but special sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel."" The driver would stil have the ability to have control of the car when neccasary. This way the driving experience is even safer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25166b0e35f7,0565752FDEEF,"The author states ""If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?"" This would make the passing of the law to allow self driving cars tricky ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3fe90b0e25c3,0565752FDEEF,however it can be done. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ca83ccc2b814,0565752FDEEF,"Self drive cars are the cars of the future because, they can brake, accelerate and steer on their own. This makes them safer and more reliable. This would save lives and prevent injuries which makes them the smart choice for cars in the future, Manufactures should focus on developing self driving cars for the good of the world. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fee0be249dad,057AF0C42467,The Faces on mars are not created by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43fa8bef7bdf,057AF0C42467,How do i know this? Well for one i know that there can't be a bare human face under the planet of mars. If there were faces under mars then that person would had been dead. It looks like that them faces are justt a natural landform that just arrived on Mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ff488b7fe35,057AF0C42467,The NASA wishes that there wree civilization on Mars ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aae7a1b2d36b,057AF0C42467,Why is that? The NASA is trying to prove that the aliens put them unfilmualr faces onto Mars. When Mars jsut had them faces grew onto there. The faces were not put there for the aliens. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8fa0b7e9049,057AF0C42467,The scientists also believed that the face that is on Mars arrived on Mars in September 1997. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+46761e584f7f,057AF0C42467,That was eighteen years ago when the Vikings missions ended. Jim Garvin also said they took a picture of it when they first heard about the faces arriving on Mars. The NASA program felt it was very important that they get a good picture of the faces on Mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3841046c410a,057AF0C42467,"April 5, 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over the first time beinging. Miachel Malin had his Oribiter Camera. Miachel and his team took a perfect shot ten times. The picture was sharper then the Vikings original photos ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7d08eafc01f,057AF0C42467,The tem relalized that there were no aliens after all. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0b72de7371cf,057AF0C42467,Even though the team had got the picture everyone was no so happy still. The camera that they had on board had peer wispy clouds. The aliens was hidding by the haze when the team had taken the ten pictures. Image 3 was way bigger then the pixel size they thought it would be ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66bcd8680657,057AF0C42467,The lava dome takes a form of an isolated mesa which means its the same height as the Face on Mars. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+29dcbf247121,057DACBB2B12,"1.) What is the Electoral College' A electoral college is a process, not a place. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a61615f46da2,057DACBB2B12,"I didn't know they had 538 electors. majority of 270 electoral votes. Representatives plus two for your Senators. . . . The Congressional delegation one of each memeber in the house. But i do think the District of Columbia. is each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. Chosen a party political party, responsibilities. but what will happen if something happens to the congress what will go wrong? for the stuff that they be having partys for the policital paartys & stuff what do they do that for the things they have. like will the president be alright with this stuff that be going on ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aaf86bcfadb0,057DACBB2B12,these things is good ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+af4bcef4110d,057DACBB2B12,cause we will like the same things but idk know it that was alot of 538 electors but some of it will work ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ffd314f5c9ec,057DACBB2B12,I understand what the American people is doing its a factor that some of yall got to learn thoe ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+049004d0436e,057DACBB2B12,"Kennedy i don't understand his and they way he do like its alot for the candidate but for the other ones i dont know like what's up with the candidate and kenndey, the passage says .. In the same vein, ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please... oh, and what if the state sends two slates of electors to Congress? it happened in Hawaii in 1960. Vice President richard Nixon, who was presiding over the Senate, validated only his opponent's electors, but he made sure to do so ""without establishing a precedent."" what if that happend again? During the 200 campaign , seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b54022e54598,057DACBB2B12,Yes that's right they do have to make it to the candidate first they just can't walk up there first you got to be president by the pesident frist if you not by him or here then you messe dup for goood ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1d277921ea20,057DACBB2B12,"its not working out like that at all. it's official: the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it all mostly assertions in without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4fa11ce38cf8,057DACBB2B12,"3.) In 2012 election, for example, Obamma received 61.4 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and romney. . . . BEcause almkost all states award electoral votes on a winner -take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in astate creates a landslide electoral -vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes 538 is an even number, but it is highly unlikely. . . . The residents of each other regions are likely to be a successful presidents. The residents of other regions are likely to be feel disenfranchised- to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard. Swing States' [2012's] election- to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states. . . . Big Staes' The popular vote was very close in Florida [in 2012]; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in Wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes. So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidentail candidates in a campaign than a small state does. . . . Avoid Run-Off Elections' Nixon in 1968 and Clintion in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes , while winning a majority in the Electoral College (301 and 370 electoral votes, respectively) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f74c3a2a99ed,057DACBB2B12,"There is presssure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e65dcdb02db,057DACBB2B12,It can be argued that the electoral College method of selecting the president amy turn of potentail ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+0cda1e1d8f4c,057DACBB2B12,that is right because sometimes you really don't have that much of that stuff like that now but sometimes its hard to see stuff like that but you got to work on some things like that but not everything likec come on now. so candidates who do that some want. . . . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b90e01bd821,057DACBB2B12,"But of course no voter's vote swings a naional election, and spite of that about one-half the eligible American population did vote in [2012's] election. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dc31a2c8a5dc,057DACBB2B12,"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. . . . Democrats in Texas, for example , or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect , tghey have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. . . .            ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d913288b394,05A06DE4B96C,I believe we should hange to election by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+660b8f6245e9,05A06DE4B96C,"The people take time out of their busy lives to become a registered voter to vote on who they want to be president, but they're not voting for the president they're voting for electors. Those electors then elect the president. Why waste our time? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+349b2da05d93,05A06DE4B96C,"Those electors can just elect a president without our help, but that wouldnt be fair for the people not to have a say in who governs our country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8ed89c72853,05A06DE4B96C,"To begin with, It's in the best interest of the people that we should'nt have a Electoral College ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b134b0972a33,05A06DE4B96C,"For example, in
+
+Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even th best-laid defenses of the system are wrong states
+
+; ""
+
+The best argument against the Electoral College is the 2000 fiasco that is the lagest election crisis in years; the system allows much worse.
+
+"", ( Bradford Plumer ). The 2000 fiasco let legislature choose the electors, but the electors could go behind the peoples back and
+
+""defy their will""
+
+( Bradford Plumer ). We don't need the electors help, we need a say so in the decision. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8038787432a,05A06DE4B96C,others believe that we should keep the Electoral college ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4870a69065f8,05A06DE4B96C,"In
+
+Source 3: In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president
+
+; they give us ""
+
+five reasons for retaining the Electoral College
+
+"" ( Richard A. Posner ). The first reason is ""
+
+Certainty of Outcome
+
+"" which goes on to say that; ""
+
+... almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state makes a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state.
+
+"", ( Richard A. Posner ). The second reason is ""
+
+Everyone's President
+
+"" that states that; ""
+
+The Electoral College requires a presidential canidate to have trans-regional appeal.
+
+"", ( Richard A. Posner ). ""
+
+Swing States
+
+"" is the third reason, talks about Toss-up States. The fourth reason is ""
+
+Big States
+
+"" which sates ""
+
+that the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance...
+
+"" ( Richard A. Posner ). The fifth and final reason is ""
+
+Avoid Run-Off Elections
+
+"", it says that ""
+
+... no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast.
+
+"" ( Richard A. Posner ) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0241e5ed0636,05A06DE4B96C,"I understand what Richard is saying and he has lots of evidence to back his oppinion up, but i disagree with him. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4a0d8626ce3d,05A06DE4B96C,"Inconclusion, We the people deserve to have our votes count for something. We go out of our way in our daily lives to vote, and they dont even matter, because we vote to have someone else choose for us. ""
+
+The Electoral Colledge is regarded as a non-democratic way of choosing a president...
+
+"", ( Richard A. Posner ). We the people have the right to vote, so give us the right to. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b6b199c50bcc,05A6C6DF86A9,More than 60% of kids who do online schooling score an average of 250 points lower on the SATs than kids who go to school. Online learning isn't an effective way to gain a decent education and students would not benefit from it ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e92639628d5,05A6C6DF86A9,First of all online education puts you in a learning environment that is not suited for learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f5a4ec64ade,05A6C6DF86A9,Secondly it disconnects you from your fellow peers that could've helped you when you were struggling to understand material. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cc1d0fc5b71b,05A6C6DF86A9,Finally it blocks off the essential skill development of how to work together and with other people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+54b859552889,05A6C6DF86A9,Online learning may be easier than real school but in the end it leaves you at a disadvantage and unprepared for college and life as an adult. ,Position,Effective,,,
+c13808fb05d5,05A6C6DF86A9,Learning at home through a computer may should nice but its not all what it seems. Learning can become increasingly difficult when your at home and not in a class room because when your at home it makes it very hard to focus ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6cfe521c9e67,05A6C6DF86A9,"as you now have access to all the video games, TV and any other form of entertainment. It also means you are not under any teacher supervision which allows you to daze off and easily be distracted by pets or younger siblings. Especially in our day and age where we have cell phones, you would always be able to go on your phone whenever you'd like consequently missing what little important information your being taught. Another important factor ,that most people don't even think about, is the fact that you lose all the connections with your fellow classmates who can be valuable sources of information. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+00365233baec,05A6C6DF86A9,"With the loss of fellow classmates it can make an impact greater than most people think. Humans are social creatures which allows us to thrive when working and collaborating with one another. Now when your taken out of that environment and placed in an environment that forces you to do all the work alone it destroys your work speed and makes it far more difficult to process and absorb information because you don't have the different perspectives or incites your classmates could have given you. Not having classmates also could make it harder to interact with unfamiliar people because when your in class your always meeting and socializing with new and unique people, now being taken out of that your no longer exposed to any of these interactions meaning you would have to relearn these social skills which could be very challenging as a teenager which could lead to worse problems like being socially awkward ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4919351cb5b6,05A6C6DF86A9,Without classmates you will miss out on key social skills that may show its scars further down the road of life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b8e5399234e9,05A6C6DF86A9,"Getting along socially with other people isn't a given, we spend up to 16 years in the class room together nurturing key social skills that we will continue to use throughout our entire lives. Now imagine what would happen if you were taken out of the classroom. The effects would be devastating, you would miss out on the social development you gain from schooling and it would cause turmoil. This would be such a massive problem because social skills are a key instrument to have when in the work place, if you not able to articulate ideas and information to fellow employees properly it would strip these what wouldve been bright employees to substandard workers not fit for upper management jobs ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b5ba6a355c16,05A6C6DF86A9,Along with this without the key development of social skills these student that did online schooling could appear unappealing to other people leaving them lonely which would turn into depression making that person live a sad and horrible existence. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c31dd468d2ac,05A6C6DF86A9,Online schooling and courses is just not the way to gain a proper education and it does more damage than anything else. Because people need other people taking them out of the class room for even one year for online schooling can have devastating impacts on the student and it may take years to reverse the damage. Risking vital aspects of success like the development of social skills and the brain is just not worth the easy courses of online schooling and should never be implemented into school systems. It sets you up to be steps be hide your peers meaning you'll always have to play catch up. In the end online schooling isn't worth the all the struggles you'll have to face as an adult and in college and its my strong recommendation that you stay away from it. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8dcb0fb80215,05B3CD46C701,"In the article ¨Driverless Cars Are Coming,¨ the author talkes about positive and negative aspects of having diverless cars. Driverless cars can be very dangerous for they can only operate correctly in the right condicions. These smart cars could be putting peoples lives at risk and cause serious problems, and the only way these problems could be truly solved is with a great abundence of money. Aruguments would accure about whos fault it would be if someone were to get into an accident. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c2a9047a1dec,05B3CD46C701,"Driverless Cars need to be highly improved or not put onto the roads, you should always be more safe than sorry. ",Position,Effective,,,
+aba28692ae0e,05B3CD46C701,"in this article it says, ¨ all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and aroung accidents¨(7). Showing how dangerous these smart cars can really be. If the car can not work properly in the condicions that are all around us, what makes them safe to have on the roads? As the cars keep devoloping the more dangerous they will become to us humans, if smart cars ever get to the point where they truly are driverless it would not be neraly as safe to be out on the roads. This is because these cars are know to have problem with changes in the road and when they notice this change they are programed to alert the human driver. Thinking of that, what if a child were to run out onto the road, how fast can this car really react, or how fast could this smart care alert the human driver? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+763380aa9119,05B3CD46C701,These driverless cars should be concidered hilgly dangerous to humans for they will never have the power to oberate just as a human could. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f54c2e09d808,05B3CD46C701,"these cars could only hurt not help human kind, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+743c2fc04857,05B3CD46C701,"¨Originally, many futurist believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday was not so much smarter cars as roads¨(3). This idea would help solve many problems that come along with the diverless car, but therfore would cause a great problem of its own. These smart roads would be highly expensive and the only way to pay for them would be the peoples money, and that seems almost impractical. These smart roads used electrical cables and magnets to help guide the car down the road, and with these ideas you would be putting the power into the roads not the cars. And with that these driverless cars would be much saver for everyone. But these roads could never be used for that they would take way too much money to be instaled, saying that driverless cars still remain unsafe. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+83e111f3b347,05B3CD46C701,Overall these cars would also be very hard to get llegalised. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1b4591e363f1,05B3CD46C701,"¨Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers¨(9). Therefore, it is already hard enough to keep the drivers alert and watching the road while they are driving now, could you imagen how hard it would be to keep people alert when they have nothing to do? These laws are there to keep people safe and smart cars are the easy way to go not the safe way. Also, serious arguments would accure that would only cause problems not solve anything. Because what if this car gets into an accident while self-driving, would it be the drivers fault or the manufacture? Could you blame it on the driver and say they should have been more alert or say that the manufacture should have made/programed their cars better? These arguments and cases would be never ending, because almost all humans do not want to be saw as guilty so they would do and say anything to get off the hook. As to say, these smart driverless cars would do a lot more harm than help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a549e2dfca0c,05B3CD46C701,"To justify my argument that everyone should be against the development of these driverless cars, just think about if it was you. These cars can not be pradictable and no one can be postive what will really happen. But what if it was you who got hurt or maybe a family memeber, because they let these unsafe and unperdicable cars out onto the roads. You would have no one to blame because it was just a machine or just a accendent. They are never meant to hurt but everyone would rather be safe than sorry. Make the right choice and do whats right to keep people safe, not to make their lives easier. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+511b187bbe49,05BE83E193CF,i strongly believe in keeping the electoral college to be in chare of the way the elections would proceed instead of changing the outcome of elections to popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f5a5cfca773,05BE83E193CF,because voters may not believe in what the candidate's intentions for the people but may like the candidate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad27d413691c,05BE83E193CF,it is more organized ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc703fb21ddf,05BE83E193CF,the people would be pleased with the outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cedf89905f91,05BE83E193CF,The electoral college is a great way of proceeding with elections because changing the way our election system is to one of popularity voting would not be wise because voters may not believe in what the candidate's intentions are for the people but they may like the candidate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+369cd41c34a2,05BE83E193CF,There is more of a certainty when the electoral college is in charge ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d537ed5be479,05BE83E193CF,for example when Obama was running against Romney he only received 61.7% of the electoral vote compared to the 51.3% percent of the popular votes that have been casted for both him and Romney but because of the majority percentage of electoral votes that were casted in his favor ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8a55f57894f,05BE83E193CF,The electoral college is more organized than a popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+146844244ef4,05BE83E193CF,"because if a voter has voted for example Obama for the electoral vote but voted for Romney for the popular vote it would be unorganized because of the split vote between popular and electoral which is recquired the majority of when in a public govermental election which could impact the whole future for the nation. The election for Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 they both had only a 43 percentage plurality of popular votes while also winning a majority in the electoral college which was (301 and 370 electoral votes) . When no candidate fully wins the majority of the votes that were casted they wouldn't have to recount the votes of have a re-election which would drain the economies money because of the high amount of money put into one election in the first place just to have another election, whereas the electoral college can just step in and rectify the situation just by producing a clear winner on their own instead of going through a long process just to find out who the clear winner is all they have to do is debate among themselves who they believe the people would be happy with in the long run . 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+318fd91a5e44,05BE83E193CF,Electoral college is the best way because in the long run the people would be pleased with the outcome that they have voted for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b832f04249c3,05BE83E193CF,because if it was turned into a popular vote election people who voted for a specific president wouldn't have won just because they aren't popular amongst the people that are voters iin that year's election ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8f80f2c6f6c,05BE83E193CF,However the popular vote election may also be a good idea because if the voters cast a vote for you in the  popular election that should essentially like your intentions that would benefit the countries needs and demands that are recquired for us in the long run ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+51cd4892ec58,05BE83E193CF,"Therefore the electoral college should stay in charge of all decsions having to do with the elections for new presidencey when the time time comes because if it was changed to popular vote people would vote for the candidate that they like the best instead of the candidate with the best intentions for the nation, it is considerably more organized than a popular vote election , and the people would be end up being pleased with the outcome in the long run.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+902eb33bf979,05D9F32E2DC7,"As Americans, we are told that we are given rights in our country. We have the freedom of speech, expression, religion, and petition as stated in our first admendment. We are also told the we have the freedom to vote once you reach certain requirements, like age and citizenship. However, are we really getting the freedom that is talked about? No. Because the Electoral College is present in today's society, our vote becomes pointless and meaningless. We become a ""popular"" vote, but really the electoral college gets to decide who becomes presidents ",Lead,Effective,,,
+707272110447,05D9F32E2DC7,"The Electoral College has been in our Constitution since the Constitution was approved, but we have modified simple things as in gender discrimination and race discrimination, why are we not going to change this unjust system? 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+4e78912aa5cb,05D9F32E2DC7,the electoral college is fooling our citizens to think we have a say in our country's government. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4eb4666f372f,05D9F32E2DC7,"He elaborates further to say that ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the presidet, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. This proves my point further, because once again we do not vote for our president, we vote for the people who get the ""priveledge"" to vote for the most prestine place of power in our entire country. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d56acea30f79,05D9F32E2DC7,The next problem with our Electoral College is that each state is given an uneven amount of representatives form each state. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+689662efdc34,05D9F32E2DC7,"If Florida voted canidate A, but North Dakota voted for canidate B, canidate A is bound to win because Florida has twenty-nine representatives and North Dakota only has three. As you can see Mr. President, this becomes a preblem because four states with only three representatives could vote for one canidate, but if Florida votes for the other one, the first canidate has already lost. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3a191c31a86c,05D9F32E2DC7,"Now most people are afraid of change, which is understandable. They are afraid chaos will occur if any change with our society's ethics ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3a01be1748ad,05D9F32E2DC7,"However, the Electoral College has already caused chaos between the two opposing sides. If we tried a new system, we could see if the people will become more civilized because they now have a say in the government. If it doesn't work, then we can always change it back and no harm will be done. As you can see, there are many possibilities and options we have yet to explore. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5f66c842cecc,05D9F32E2DC7,"Mr. President, I have explained to you what the people want, which is to stop being lied to. However, every four years comes around, and yet I do not see a change in anything. I do not think it is only the people who are afraid of change, it is also you. But, would you want to live in a world where everyone hates the way the government works or a world where the citizens are given the rights they were promised? Mr. President it is now up to you to do the right thing. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+16b1c2ada594,05F5B97B159A,"Many people believe that the image taken by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft, when it was circuling aroung the plantet, snapping photos from Viking 2 landing. The photo shown and proveded to us is from the year 1998, it has now been modeled diffrentlly from our latest technology. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b356de7b709e,05F5B97B159A,"This is a mesa it couldn't have been made from aliens becuase the way it was observed in the Jet Propulsion Lab, could not identify it as it being fake or made by aliens as some people believe it is. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+12dbf14d8c4f,05F5B97B159A,Some scientists have studided this image since was revealed. This happened about twenty five years ago when this was released. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ede7d43543d2,05F5B97B159A,"This image we see has beeing used and talked about in many places such as Hollywood films, books, magazines, radio stations, talk shows, and grocery stores. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a881e8f9f0f7,05F5B97B159A,"When it first came to NASA and the public it was shown as if there was a human face becuase like it says in paragraph three, secound sentence, ""The caption noted a ""huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving it the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" That to me tells me that there could have been life on Mars at some point in time but we were probably not exsiting back in the time life could have been in Mars. Its just a mesa becuase on paragraph seven, first and secound sentence, it says, ""So on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharpers than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc49666492a9,05F5B97B159A,Those two sentence clarify to me that there are no aliens making things on Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4caf15ef10e,05F5B97B159A,"
+The claim of a face was scientificly proven by Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera that it was just a landform and that there is no aliens making things that look like human shape heads and faces. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+833dc31b7ea1,05F5B97B159A,"Also there is an exact location of where you can find this on Mars which is, ""41 degrees north martian latitude."" Even though people were not happy about what they saw but at least we know its just a landform with a great creation of the mesa. No aliens can create something like a landform that looks like"" it remeinds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain if Idaho"", says Garvin. There is a way to remember this and it be the face on Mars or like the MIddle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho.             ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fcb3c925110,0628DB049A56,I would have to urge you to keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Effective,,,
+51a8efcffad9,0628DB049A56,"Without a voting system as organized as this, it would be anarchy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+004a634b816d,0628DB049A56,"Some people believe that election by popular vote is better, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6abc1240ec46,0628DB049A56,but it is not. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7f35e2dbbecf,0628DB049A56,They believe that the Electoral College is non-democratic and outdated. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b8bda794bef6,0628DB049A56,But there are many reasons why it's not. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+40eef4a5c8de,0628DB049A56,"The Electoral College process is in use currently, and though many people disagree with it, it would ultimately be better than popular vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+608ab9b55c8b,0628DB049A56,"We have to put faith in the electors we vote for,  this makes it less likely any of them are crooks. When people vote for an elector, they're voting for who they hope the president will be. While that may not always be the case, it's very likely the elector will vote for that candidate. With this, we'd have to trust the elector with our votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ffdcf549a98,0628DB049A56,"If we were to use the popular vote system, people could vote for candidates who run for fun, or joke. Or if a candidate decides to pursuade an overwhelming amount of people with a certain point, people will surely vote on that candidate, even if the point is invalid. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ca0cf3e1d02,0628DB049A56,"This can bring the expectations for the president lower,    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d65e3bf66895,0640FE8DF9D6,"Imagine your alarm clock goes off and you get out of bed, and after doing your morning routine instead of grabbing your book bag to heading out and catching the bus for school instead you open your laptop and open up a video chat with your teacher to get your lesson of the day instead. This idea isn't and is referred to as distance learning. Distance learning already exists in most colleges such as Generic_School and has started to develop in high schools. Many have the impression that this could be the new way to do school work. Others believe that distance learning won't bring much of a change as it says it is and have a rather niche effect in schools ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3bb6692bcd81,0640FE8DF9D6,I strongly believe that distance learning can make a big difference in the learning environment. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+65ad24abaf24,0640FE8DF9D6,Every year students end up missing days due to sickness or other matters. These sickly students almost always come back to loads of work to do that they can could not get done while they where out recovering. Distance learning can help with this near inevitable factor ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2b9d8b33a40e,0640FE8DF9D6,"Instead of students worrying about what work they're missing on their sick days they can open up their device and do the work from home. This same practice could also be used in scenarios such as snow days,tornadoes,floods or other bad weather that causes schools to shut down. This could also be the new way to combat schools having to add more school days to make up for the missed ones. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1533c4f5a200,0640FE8DF9D6,"Focusing on other issues, what if you don't even have schools in your area? There are several kids out in the world that live in rural locations are so far from schools that it'd even be too much to send a bus out to bring them to school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f759a82f2f8b,0640FE8DF9D6,"This leaves rural students most of the time only two options:move to another house or be home schooled instead by a parent which doesn't give as good as a education as public schools. Home schooling can put a strain on the parent because most of the time it interferes with their jobs. It's unfair knowing that people fall short on education and opportunities compared to everyone else because of the area they live in. The implementation of distance learning can change this problem almost entirely for these students. Places like Australia already participate in this practice with some outback residents attending schools right form their house. No matter where you your house is, you should still be able to get your education ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8eb1ebdbcdfd,0640FE8DF9D6,"As great as distance learning sounds it, as with all decisions, does not come without drawbacks. Tackling possibly it's biggest problem, distance learning has a high technological dependency to function efficiently and having tech means spending lots of money. 
+",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+785046b6a7e7,0640FE8DF9D6,"
+Some schools just dont have the funds to afford technology to give to students which distance learning heavily relies on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7535fefef5c2,0640FE8DF9D6,"We should be well aware of the financial problem of this idea and maybe in time someone can find a way to make this method more accessible to the masses 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bdc3c1f20fbd,0640FE8DF9D6,"Distance learning is a relatively new method on how people get their education. No matter the outside conditions, distance learning can still give students their assignments for the day. This idea in other countries has proven to go beyond and into remote places and provide education to places without schools. Even with the limitations is has now, I'm sure that the use of it will most likely spread in the future. I believe that within some years that distance learning could be a practical way to do school; in fact, it could even be the primary way to attend school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d1a41f054ff4,065FB99EB165,"The electoral college is a process that supposedly helps keep this nation's voting under control, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b83860ed069b,065FB99EB165,while infact the process of the electoral college is unfair ,Position,Adequate,,,
+46723cf5dcf1,065FB99EB165,to the states with a lower population because they have less of an input into the voting of the president with a lower number of electors available to vote for them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f96dbbe64faf,065FB99EB165,Also it is unfair to the people who want to be presidents because they mostly have a tie on the electoral votes and are elected on who wins the popular vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+475c0febc95c,065FB99EB165,"First off, having an electoral college in unfair to those states of lower population, take Minnesota for example, because they are only allowed 3-6 electors while bigger states, like California, are allowed up to 55 electors, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+72c63ceb8030,065FB99EB165,"Since most of the big states already have their votes planned out on who is going to win them over, president-to-be's don't try to persuade them because they know they have those votes. Mostly they try to change the swing states, or the smaller states because they could change from Democratic to Republican during anytime in the election. If everyone had a say in the election, more people would be inclined to vote and there would be more input into who became the next 4 year leader of this nation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7999531b31f2,065FB99EB165,"Second of all, electoral colleges should change because for the last two elections, popular vote has been the deciding vote because the electoral vote has been a tie, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62fc12b1b2b9,065FB99EB165,".If we no longer polled electoral votes, citizens wouldn't have to take two votes, one on presidency and one on who they liked better. Presidents should be chosen on their stamina to change the nation for the people. Although some people still won't get what they want, the majority of the nation would be proud to support eachother in any of the changes the president makes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f254e1c4733a,065FB99EB165,"In the world that is known, electoral colleges do make voting for the president a lot more controlled. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7c2da3c2b662,065FB99EB165,But in the event that the elector is chosen and does not vote for whom he or she was elected by the people to vote for. What happens then? The wrong president is chosen because there was a fault in the system. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7bf4553463f7,065FB99EB165,"This is called the disaster factor and it happened in the election in the year 1960 when Louisiana elected Democrats to vote against John F. Kennedy, who voted as Republicans against their state and voted forPresident Kennedy, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f801eba72521,065FB99EB165,"After all, electoral colleges should be changed because it is better for the people so there is more of an input from smaller populated states, they will want to vote and there would be less of an ability to tie the election. Having a popular vote lets the citizens in big states that are metaphorically already ""chosen"" allows the minority vote to maybe have a chance in the office. Last but not least, it is understood that having the electoral college decreases wrong-doings, but if the elector chosen by the state changes his intentions just for himself, that gives the state no word about it.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f62b35c372bb,06A2C91F38FE,After researching the Electoral College process I find that the process should no longer be used. The process is not effecient for choosing the next US president and therefor the voting process should be changed to popular vote. ,Position,Effective,,,
+a9684f12e818,06A2C91F38FE,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c40bcc557fd,06A2C91F38FE,"This makes the Electoral College not a democratic method for electing the president. This nation was founded on the belief of democracy, so when the government ignores the call for a democratic method for elections it is disrespectful towards out Founding Fathers, and especially to the citizens of the United States of America. Furthermore, state representatives may misrepresent a state, possibly by defiance. This has happened in the 2000 campaign where segregationalists defied the people and nearly succeeded in replacing the electors for those who opposed Josh F. Kennedy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe17305f4de4,06A2C91F38FE,Although defying the people does not happen often ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6b1c0652fd3e,06A2C91F38FE,"there is still the risk of repeating history to a greater extent. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bece1b4ceba1,06A2C91F38FE,"Continuing, the ''winner takes all system'' causes states with smaller populations to be ignored. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+403b52c94169,06A2C91F38FE,"According to source 3, ""Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote."" Larger states are paid the most attention to by canidates because they will receive more votes than compared to the number of votes a smaller state would produce. This causes smaller states to have less interest in the campaign because they know they have a lesser chance of their favored canidate winning. Even more, canidates focus on swing states. Swing states are states that can be easily convinced for votes. It is important for all states to focus on the campaign so that an unworthy or unprepared canidate is not chosen for presidency, but only large and swing states are paying attention. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0b1f891f400f,06A2C91F38FE,"In contrast, it can be argued that no single region can shift a campaign greatly, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+67a830862978,06A2C91F38FE,nonetheless a single voter`s vote. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+274c431c371f,06A2C91F38FE,"The Electoral College should be rid of. The process is not democratic and misrepresents voting citizens in more ways than one. If voters were able to directly vote for canidates then more states would actively engage in the campaign and all people would be represented equally. It would lower the chance for downfall, and the chance for incidents to occur. I propose that the next presidential election should use the process of popular vote to choose the next president for the United States. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f4f7104e1cf0,071FB27E532B,I think that the school should participate in sports ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f598fe6e7c2a,071FB27E532B,its not because of our grades that makes you so upset its because of our attitudes and how we act around teachers and staff specially officer baker i mean the man has been though to much already ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7137df81d0fe,071FB27E532B,"the way i see it we need to have something to do with our lives and how we spend it on campus even off campus we have to behave when we are around teachers. plus i think those 4 letter words every day is driving the students crazy, I'm sorry but I'm telling the truth. But if you don't want to hear it then that's ok with me and that walking on the green going to connections please give us a break that's why boys cut up all the time because you always say walk on the green it is making us cut up like that since Elementary school we didn't have to walk on the green but now we are in middle school we have to walk on the green, i mean come on TEACHER_NAME can you just at least give this school a break and don't you get me started on boys not pulling up there pants, as RELATIVE_NAME says on RELATIVE_NAME's big happy family pants on the ground got your pants on the ground looking like a fool with your pants on the ground can't turn around with the gold in your mouth RELATIVE_NAME remix what. But she is right boys do look like fools with there pants on the ground, they got that style from jail they need to leave that style where its at and start handling there business and have s future from STUDENT_NAME ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+87ace8245453,07397A3E9D8D,"Education is a big factor in ones life. Without it, where would our society be? I am a student myself and know the difficulties and benefits of attending a physical school. Video catting just ins't the best idea for helping students develop their education. Bringing more technology into a society already involved with enough technology doesnt have a happy ending. There are more negative effects that this can bring than just attending a physical school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b3357bb91f7f,07397A3E9D8D,Students wouldn't benefit from taking classes at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc9db40a1242,07397A3E9D8D,"because they would start to slack in their work, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eaabf9b0c194,07397A3E9D8D,"going to school keeps them on a schedule that teaches them organization/ planning for their future, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e99971eb3d3e,07397A3E9D8D,and it doesn't give them the opportunity to build relationships with former students and their teachers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0d9927fb61c9,07397A3E9D8D,"Firstly, getting assignments done in class are hard enough as it is. If students are expected to get all of these assignments done at home, most of these would be completed late and/ or sloppy. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+074ff664dc24,07397A3E9D8D,"Even from my own experience, when I'm given an assignment to do in class I finish it more quickly due to the resources I have in the classroom. When assignments are given at home, it takes me longer to complete this assignment because I tend to have lots of questions that can't be answered by my parents or the internet. Video chatting isn't the same as a face to face conversation with your teacher. What if the internet is down and you're not able to communicate with your online teacher, what do you do now? As a student, I know kids aren't going to try and solve the problem, this is just another excuse they can use to as why they did not complete their assignments. Attending class at home will cause more of a stress for students because they will find other things to do that can distract them from their work. In a classroom, you have one job and that's to get your work done. Less distractions are available in a classroom when compared to your own home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+70a221b59475,07397A3E9D8D,"Secondly, school helps develop a schedule for a student to get used to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8b0c8438ec8,07397A3E9D8D,"If a student were to work from home, they would choose when they want to work and if they even feel like doing assignments that day. Having this schedule teaches them time management which helps them develop the technique for the future when planning out different things. My friend, Generic_Name, has a very hard time planning things such as hanging out with friends, when to complete assignments, etc. She learned how to manage a schedule that incorporates all of her needs and wants into her day. She is able to attend school, go to soccer practice, and still have time for her friends and family. This is one of many life lessons that attending school can give you. When people think of school they think of all the work they have to complete with no time in the day to do it. By developing this schedule it helps them manage their priorities first and helps them incorporate their wants as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+abb41a87dab5,07397A3E9D8D,"My cousin is home schooled. Her only friends are her neighbors and her teammates on her fencing team. She is a very shy girl and hates talking to people. If she were put into a school with kids her own age she might be different in the way she talks to people. This is going to effect her future in a way that might be difficult for her to get a job, buy a house, etc. Having relationships like those, with other students and teachers, makes getting through school a whole lot easier. These teachers push their students for success and online catting with teachers just doesn't form that close relationship like a teacher you see in person everyday does. I know going to school is hard and annoying, but it's those teachers and my friends that motivate me to go to school and get those positive grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4d305479c978,07397A3E9D8D,"School is a childs job, they can't just avoid the difficulties it brings because ""they feel like it."" Students already try to find reasons to not complete assignments and giving them the opportunity to attend class from their home just gives them more of an opportunity to slack off, lose those relationships they could've made, and leaves them missing out on developing a plan for their current and future life. Attending school gives students more than the education they need, but the lessons that can be used throughout their whole life.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3e39b6a57166,0741F0C1D776,COVID-19 is spreading across the world. Now this disease has killed more people than influenza has this year. Epidemiologists for the CDC are recommending that colleges across the country shut down their campuses and revert to online school so that they disperse the student population to lower the chances of the students getting infected. This suggestion has been readily accepted in colleges throughout the country. Soon public schools could follow the colleges' lead. More and more public schools are introducing a plethora of online classes. Many students are now able to do classwork and take assessments online as well as conference with their teachers from the comfort of their home. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+7d524f9ffd02,0741F0C1D776,Students would benefit from online school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+190aed2a63df,0741F0C1D776,"through more direct, one on one learning with teachers ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+784df3df0830,0741F0C1D776,building each students aptitude with technology for their future participation in the workforce ,Claim,Effective,,,
+90a33f337133,0741F0C1D776,and allowing students with a variety of ailments to continue their education at home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94d6743b4a99,0741F0C1D776,"
+First of all, with online classes students would be able to interact with their teachers on a more personal level. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c71b4e725d2,0741F0C1D776,"Currently, if a student needs help with homework or a concept that they are struggling with, most often, they will have to come and see their teacher before or after school. Some students simply do not have that availability to see their teacher or are too embarrassed to ask their teacher during the class session. With classes being taken online, the student could simply email the teacher privately to work out a time to video conference their teacher for help. This simple interaction with teachers would show that students could go to their teachers more easily and would feel more comfortable when asking questions. With this increase of inquiries, scores in the grade book could go up, increasing parental and student satisfaction. Due to the introduction of online education, teacher-student interaction would become easier and more common. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db78d39855b3,0741F0C1D776,"Second of all, Students would be able to become build their technological skills parallel to learning new material. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e0a8d9eb295b,0741F0C1D776,"Many employers in this hyper-technological world are looking for employees that will be able to keep up with new technologies as well as help their business grow. While students are at school, they have access to technology, but this access is limited and most often very basic for most people. If schools' education was offered online, many students would rapidly become accommodated with new and more complex programs and applications. Teachers could require logging of time spent studying on spreadsheets, or taking screen shots of research, as well as making projects on three-dimensional design software for every student that they have. So many things in the classroom would have to be transferred online, making students who graduate highly valued to any employer looking to hire somebody. Highschool students who become adept at using online applications would be beneficial for a student and future employers. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+881221b9493d,0741F0C1D776,"Third of all, any student that has to stay at home or be hospitalized due to a sickness would be able to continue their education. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7644a3686107,0741F0C1D776,"Throughout the year every school has a variety of issues, but one issue can truly devastate an education. If a student that is a tenth grader comes to school with what they think is a minor cold and goes about their entire day, many students would interact with this sophomore and soon all of these students would be home sick. Due to the transmission those classes would only have half the students it should have. This issue is morbidly obvious. However true this issue is, disease cannot spread through technology. Any students taking these online courses would be safe from any other students who are sick. This would allow schools' education to run with a little more grease on their axles. Due to students having an online education many students who become sick would not have to pause their education for any amount of time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3f6ca537e86,0741F0C1D776,"In order to address those opposed, it is understandable for anyone to do so, but not forgivable. Many would say that the students would lose their friends, that they might become awkward, and that students might even cheat on assessments. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+48643cca9d84,0741F0C1D776,"All of these are understandable, but they are not without solution. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c524d2021b35,0741F0C1D776,"Schools would be getting rid of their on campus schooling but would still host extracurricular activities and sporting events, along with gym classes, as well as dances and pep rallies. This would help retain student friendships at school. Students cheating on assessments has been a problematic in all school systems for years, writing on your arms and hands, looking at a friend's paper to see which bubbles they filled in, or even feverishly copying someone's homework in the hallways outside of a class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eedd5f4a40f5,0741F0C1D776,"While online learning may be a good fix for a lot of these issues it could open up new problems as well. Students could use their phones to search for answers to a variety of tests or share their answers with friends via text message. Their is no end to the creativity of someone who wants to cheat on an assignment, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fcd0479d7882,0741F0C1D776,that is why a student's parent could supervise the student on each test and let the teacher know that the student was honest. This would be an easy way of reassurance for all instructors. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bfc2fc40385a,0741F0C1D776,"In conclusion, online school for students could be greatly beneficial. Through one on one interaction with teachers, spurring more inquiries from pupils, becoming more proficient with technology at school and in the workplace, and allowing students who are afflicted with disease, and sometimes an injury, to attend school. Online school would benefit many students in this modern world. Now do what you think is right, go to a school board meeting, or sign a petition, because once we make this change, the Virginian education system will be stronger than any other state's. Now that isn't able to be said every day. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+529eac6692fa,076DBAE9AA98,This is one of your students at your school. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a4d85ceec994,076DBAE9AA98,I have written this letter to inform you that you do not have to cancel all school sports. I think that you don't need to cancel it for all student. I think that you should have the audacity to tell everyone that the sports will not be able to be played by students that have anything below an A-C average. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2ded75461b21,076DBAE9AA98,"All student with an A, B, or a C average can play any sport they wanted to but every marking period they should have to show the coach's their progress report. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+41ad325ac9b3,076DBAE9AA98,"All students should be able to show their progress reports to you, a teacher, or the coach. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea7e632dc648,076DBAE9AA98,An other reason not to cancel the sports are so that all the students can stay in shape and not have any troubles with their weight. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b4afa6225f04,076DBAE9AA98,"All the students should be able to participate in any after school program sport. All the students are able to play with each other. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+85a3317729e0,076DBAE9AA98,EX: boys play with girls or girls play with boys. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+71e15e3833b3,076DBAE9AA98,All students should have a sport to keep them active for a while and not get distracted by any thing like walking around the class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac236b63df3f,076DBAE9AA98,"All students should be active so they do not have to disturb the class with their need to let energy out of their system. ALL STUDENTS MAY PARTICIPATE IN VOLLEYBALL, BASEBALL, FOOTBALL, TENNIS, SOCCER, BAT MITTEN, BASKETBALL, TRACK, HOCKEY, ICE SKATING, ROLLER BLADING RACES, AND OTHER ACTIVITIES. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bbb3739291ae,076DBAE9AA98,ANY STUDENT WHO WANTS TO PARTICIPATE SHOULD SIGN A PERMISSION SLIP AND SHOW THEIR REPORT CARDS. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4c71e1602af2,076DBAE9AA98,Students should not be all closed up with nothing to do they should at least have an hour of fun in their school day at least twice a week there should be 2-3 hours of out side time to let their energy all out of their systems. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9f4b8a9138dc,076FE42102A1,I believe that we should be able to have cell phones and be able to use them during lunch and other free time ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f9cd53d2787,076FE42102A1,because most student have phones anyways during the day an this way there would be less trouble less sneaking texting in class less parents getting angry less problems. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31ad1c186dd4,076FE42102A1,But honestly what is this going to hurt teacher and staff have phones during the school why can't we anyways lunch is a social period. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9c723d6d437,076FE42102A1,Really I think that lunch should be extended to an hour because teens like to socialize and were not getting enough time to our self because this is ridiculous ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5b3886e0d7e4,076FE42102A1,"30 minutes to our self we barely have enough time to eat its insane that we really have no social time.
+
+But yet teachers wonder why we are so talkative in class this is my conclusion to this solution to the talking in class solution to the texting in class solution. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1c32532c2d6a,076FE42102A1,What if there is an emergency where his ride breaks down he needs a new ride how would he get home because of policy number 2 a kid got stranded at the school ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a2876ef18b2,076FE42102A1,if I were you i wouldn't pick policy 2. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5ab098f664a1,077394BE6603,"To be President of the United States you have to win the vote of the people, but not only the people also congress.. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+135b9a09bbc5,077394BE6603,I dont think that the government should be in charge of everything therefore i think the people and only  people who should vote for who is the President of the United States and not vote for electors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+96f5c0fd1b98,077394BE6603,I dont like how the electoral is set up ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b261a2efe478,077394BE6603,"for instince like it says What is Electoral College? section 10, ""If you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for Jonh Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to Kerry."" then he would get 34 electoral vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c32dcf53ad26,077394BE6603,Then anyones whos not holding office can be a elector. What makes them so qualified? nothing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25083a049506,077394BE6603,Whydoes everyone just cast a vote and they all get counted up and thats whos wins the election? I know why becaus ethe government like to be complicated. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9052cba141f9,077394BE6603,The electors could vote who ever they want they dont have to vote for the person you say ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aab50a576f38,077394BE6603,"like back in 1960, in Louisiana legislatture nearly succeeded in replacing Domocratic electors with new electors who oppose Jonh F. Kennedy so the the popular would not have gone to him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe0628216e39,077394BE6603,"All of that just seems a little complicated when it could all be settle by every one in the country voting and then adding up all the votes and thats the winner. But its the gosh, darn government that has to make it so hard.           ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+093c8355d2e4,077EA8162D03,I am against the development of Driverless cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+88ac4ae670cb,077EA8162D03,it really be a waste of money imagine all the things we can do for other causes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18ccc5369fcb,077EA8162D03,People already a lazy now they wont have to do anything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d92d590ec36,077EA8162D03,"Its not teaching them how to drive, its encouraging people to be under developed. They won't be able to access the real world they'll be spending alot of their time on social media as they do now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c99ca16389f7,077EA8162D03,"who would benifeiting off of driverless car? Yeah the rich would have them but, wouldn't they be more of a threat? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b96d4ada7c9,077EA8162D03,How useful would they be? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f951742e07c,077EA8162D03,we can be useing the funds for another purpose. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e742a5fda2a,077EA8162D03,We can buy things for the uneducated or help the homeless so many posibilities we have and we invest it in a driverless car that has no other function other than take you to your location by gps. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+305d2482f56f,077EA8162D03,the importance of a self diving vehicle isn't needed do to the technology that we have already. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7bead984a6cd,077EA8162D03,We have so much that we use it for transportation. We literally have the whole world in our pocket and we're using it for cars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd0b6649cfde,077EA8162D03,That's why it isnt a good idea to be making driverless cars. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8d5f7cd8de1c,077FC5CBB132,I feel like driveless cars are a bad idea and a good idea. The reason i say this is because it can have a good outcome to it and a bad out come. There can be probles and it can solve some solutions. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d2d98efe5222,077FC5CBB132,I think its a good idea because it can decrease some of the accidents thats happening ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bd562c257a47,077FC5CBB132,"As it says in the passage ""Gm has developed driver's seat that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backin in to an object"". Some people dont pay attention when there driving and it can lead to accidents, but with this feature of the car it can prevent all of that. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f8afe292a0b,077FC5CBB132,"Then, i also think it can be a bad idea. The reason why i say this is because there are some people out there that will take driveless cares to there advantage. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+618f22b83e87,077FC5CBB132,"For expamle, say if the person is driving in one of these driveless cars and there not paying attention cause there on there phone and the thin the car will just do everything on its on. So it a accident now. Like it says in the passage""this means human drivers must remain alert and be readdy to takke over when the situation requires. You cant take over if your busy on your phone or eating food or doing something you wouldnt do if you was driving. So thats the down part. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df662f2d4ed7,077FC5CBB132,"
+So with this being said, i think its a good and bad idea. I just think depends on the person whos driving the car should be able to handle it. But other then that its a good idea.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+74f8e51345a6,07C19143568C,"Should the electoral college stay! well this is my responds on this topic,Let get started. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cc93c4a0a22a,07C19143568C,I think the electoral college should stay ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8629ebc09189,07C19143568C,1 major reason is to let the election have a fair fight. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f79e16786596,07C19143568C,Another reason is that it in our constitution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f034b5893a9e,07C19143568C,Another important reason is that with out the electoral there would only be 1 side of a vote for ex it just be the congress voting ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fcc099fbc829,07C19143568C,With the electoral the want it to be equal so nobody goes home felling down cause he didnt have a fair ruling or a fair election ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+64c6be2594be,07C19143568C,For my 3 reason they help select how many elector on how many state could have witch for ex the 23 amendment of the constitution they allowed columbia to have 3 ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5ad433f569ab,07C19143568C,I dont now much but that sound like alot. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+786923da71f6,07C19143568C,4 reason is that each state has his or her on elector. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+454b42fe1579,07C19143568C,"If u havent notice i have said yes they should be hear to do there job as a elector and to do there job as a guy/girl to do there jobs rights. I understand why elector are trying to stay there trying to stay to have a sucessful carrer and do good in life and not be a bum that live on the street or working at mcdonalds. Another good reason is that if it turn into a tie then the house or representatives come into place and they put the thoughts into. A reason to be it unfair the electoral collehe get no credit for what happens they should get alittle for all the hard work they put into. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for president, but for a slate of electors, who turn elect the president. Who are the elector? They can be anyone not holding public office.                     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0aed14dd3ba1,07C6107B301F,"I believe that you made the correct decision. Education is very important in a students life. Being the principal, you should enforce this rule and by doing so, would improve a students future for the better. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7b5e2a07dcc5,07C6107B301F,"You should ask yourself one question and ask many other students the same question; What will get you through your life and guarantee a good future, education or sports? This question will stump all the arguments they have except for one. An athletic scholarship. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1cfa8991a1a3,07C6107B301F,I agree that sports is good for the health ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f72c4b9cb309,07C6107B301F,"but is it absolutely necessary for the future? I say no, ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bbc27409958b,07C6107B301F,because not everyone is going to get an athletic scholarship. The odds are for getting an athletic scholarship are slim and there will be many people who are competing for it too. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e7f87f37664c,07C6107B301F,Education is very important ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd6ca6d37f3e,07C6107B301F,"there are many jobs out there that require people with an education, while as there are very few jobs that require you to be good at sports. In this world, education will get you far and having a C average isn't going to cut it. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+35bae84ab12c,07C6107B301F,"If they spend just as much time studying as they do playing sports, then it wouldn't be a problem, but when they neglect studying just to play sports, then they are harming there future. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bde7ad2147e0,07C6107B301F,"Think about all the futures you could save by just putting a little discipline. A C isn't very far from an F and that could jeopardize there whole life. If they study hard, they can have fun and live a good life when they get older, but having fun and neglecting studying now isn't going to give them a relaxing and fun future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4097f0102e65,07C6107B301F,"If they are trained to study hard and play sports at the same time, it will pay off because they will have to get organized and pay attention to time management. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2bcef50d59e7,07C6107B301F,This is very important in High school and College because time management and organization will get you good grades ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95ac3cdd7c66,07C6107B301F,". I strongly recommend that you enforce this rule. Just watch the events unfold when you enforce it. There grades will rise and eventually they will be accustomed to all the hard work they put in. Education is everything and will shape your life, while sports is just an extracurricular activity that might or might not get you an Athletic scholarship. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3b381d42f86e,07CE3E0B4129,"Decisions are important in everyday life and affect many people around you in such a great way or a horrible way ,but you can only decide how it affects them. Community service is a great way to help your community you can tutor young children or you can clean graffiti and litter, but some people don't enjoy doing this or some don't even have time to fit this type of activity into their daily schedule. TEACHER_NAME I don't think that you would enjoy someone coming into your home telling you what to do would you? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9c44fc2290f4,07CE3E0B4129,I do not agree with you on requiring all students to participate in community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+01d2e264a62e,07CE3E0B4129,because people have busy schedule and live ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9ab41fdacc7,07CE3E0B4129,and also some people don't want to participate in community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c0966f208a7,07CE3E0B4129,why would you want to require them to participate in community service when all its going to do is make their lives even more hectic. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aea4119913d8,07CE3E0B4129,why make them do something that they wont even enjoy . I f the students don't enjoy what their doing then they wont understand the lesson that they are suppose to learn from the experience. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e75081c6e96,07CE3E0B4129,In conclusion TEACHER_NAME all i have to asked you is would you want to be forced to do something that you didn't want do? I don't agree with requiring the students to do community service. What I do think is fair and will accommodate every one is a sign up sheet asking students if they want to participate in community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d98481b6409,07D075719A6D,I believe that there should be no more Electoral College because it doesn't give people much of a say in who becomes President because there is just a commitee of people that are voting for the President. ,Position,Effective,,,
+370a627ef54d,07D075719A6D,The Electoral College established by the founding fathers in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6038298bc808,07D075719A6D,"The Electoral College only consists of qualified citizens it elect the President, so even when you vote the majority doesn't even matter because the President is only elected by those qualified citizens. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f5c6487980f3,07D075719A6D,"A lot of people prefer to have a different way of voting than we have now. ""According to a Gallup poll in 2000, shortly after Al Gore won the popular vote but, still lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind that we have now"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c3ed564a94d,07D075719A6D,"more that half the country doesn't want the closed election, they want a direct election. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d12f17978c6c,07D075719A6D,"Some people still say that the Electoral College is a good thing because they think it is a fair way of voting for President, but even if their vote doesn't really matter they still think it is a good thing to have for our country. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fe8bcb789219,07D075719A6D,"Also if they vote for a canidate who has the popular vote and still loses because the Electoral College voted for a different person, they might think that it is unfair, but they still think it is a good way of doing things. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d3b36c7a3ab1,07D075719A6D,"All in all, we should do away with the Electoral College because it is an unproper way of voting for the President and also can be unfair. It is unfair because it doen't give people a say in who should become President. If the person running for office has the majority vote and still doesn't win, it shows that the people of this country don't really get a say in things that are important. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c162ead7a67c,07D0B701C682,"Have you ever sat in your room and looked at the ceiling for a while and you see a weird shape or face? If you haven't have you ever stared into space and seen a shape or face? Do you think of how it got there, from an alien, your imagination, or natural landform? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+00bf560e3bb9,07D0B701C682,"My guess would be natural landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+ff5e130ba34f,07D0B701C682,"I am saying natural landform because alians aren't real, and if they were why would they create a human face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f5b4ce156f5,07D0B701C682,"Maybe they were tryin to send a sign, if they were trying to send a sign why couldn't they have just come to earth and tell us what we need to know. What was the point of going to Mars no one lives on Mars we live on Earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4b992f3247a,07D0B701C682,"The is a 50/50 chance that it could be your imagination, just like if you were staring out of space or looking up at the ceiling and see a random shape or face, that is your imagination, so it could be you imagination. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+974fc21aa615,07D0B701C682,"But the scientist wasn't really focused on this ""face"" they just happened to look over an see it otherwise just like if it was your imagination you would be very focused on to something and happen to see it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f326826cc989,07D0B701C682,"It is a natural landform because when Mars came about this ""face"" was made along with it no one else put it their it naturaly came along. You can believe that it was put their by an alien but by the evidence and how I proved it you might think that it natural landform. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c503c0ed9639,07E503B34962,I think all of the kids in our community should do community service whether its with younger children or even just picking trash up along the road side. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0c96085f3f50,07E503B34962,The main reason i believe that we should support the idea of community service is because it shows responsibility and respect for the community we live in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21bf325574dd,07E503B34962,Helping other people that could not help themselves would show great citizenship. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b1740a2716f,07E503B34962,There is not just helping people for community service. You could pick up trash and let people know we are serious about being a clean town ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9f3f122f975,07E503B34962,Sometimes community service is the best for kids with problems ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ce0934b13dc,07E503B34962,because they don't have a roll model in their life at least a good roll model that can set good goals and responsibilities for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e811ad0ea531,07E503B34962,These are some of my ideas and opinions about community service being good for us. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fd14720eab5f,0825571D1A47,"School can make some of the social challenges that certain students face more difficult and for others school can create these same challenges. Anxiety is something that many of deal with, some cases worse than others. Anxiety in the classroom is amplified. This can lead to a drop in grades and performance in school. Attention disorders such as ADD an ADHD can make school dreadful at times. Online classes that are taken at home will put the student in a comfortable space in which he or she can focus in their classes without 30 other things happening. Students can go through so much in their own lives, not to forget the fact in which we live in a world of chaos.
+
+Tragedies, or ""interruptions"" happen in everyone's life and as students going to school is either not an option or is a very difficult one ",Lead,Effective,,,
+96e2214c654b,0825571D1A47,Students would benefit from having the ability to take online classes at home. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b508c85e2b50,0825571D1A47,Imagine being in a hallway with what seems like a million new faces every day and you are not familiar with anyone. Making friends is hard when you have anxiety because the most comfortable place is yourself. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+189699a05ef0,0825571D1A47,"A student with anxiety can be taking a test that is very challenging and tedious and the walls will seem as if they are beginning to shrink and close that student in. That is anxiety, anxiety is going over a whole conversation and going over what you will say so you dont mess up. Anxiety is scary. As you can imagine, school with 2000 kids everyday can be difficult for students. Working to overcome your anxiety can take a long time and is necessary but better results will be achieved when the student makes the decision for themselves to take classes at school rather than home because some kids just arent ready for that yet. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+574802e6939e,0825571D1A47,Many students including myself suffer with attention disorders such as ADD and ADHD ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+adc45de69896,0825571D1A47,"You can just take a guess on why this would make school in a classroom hard. ADD and ADHD cause students to struggle to maintain focus and they both do it in different ways. Picture yourself day to day always finding yourself mentally blank, forgetting simple task, Losing your train of thought, and battling your mind trying to do a million things at once. This is the life of many students. Attention disorders can be treated with medication, however many families either cant afford the medication due to lack of health care or refuse to let their children take an addictive controlled substance. Some parents just think that there kid doesnt even try or is just ""dumb"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e1f3955e66e1,0825571D1A47,The 504 plan is a plan that was made to accommodate and assist students with learning disabilities. This plan works by giving students more time to complete assignments and giving students accommodations to put them in a learning environment that will benefit them ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1a3cad8537b0,0825571D1A47,"Sadly students with learning disabilities are forgotten about and neglected. Unlike children with autism or special needs students with attention disorders take the same classes as the general population. Therefore students 504 plans are followed based on who the teacher is, and sadly some teachers dont care. This means the student will not receive any accommodations such as more time on test. This can lead to poor grades, and not because the student isnt prepared. A student with ADD will have to read a problem 5 times before they really retain the information and even then everything is done slower because when students with attention disorders try to force their brain work too fast that is when things are forgotten and missed. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+85d5d135451a,0825571D1A47,"An online class in the peace and quiet of your own home with the things you need to help you focus, things that you cant always have at school will surely benefit this student from an educational stand point and mentally. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9617b7c23477,0825571D1A47,"Life happens. Students go through more than you can imagine. Everyday students deal with the death of loved ones, pregnancies, abuse, sickness. These are things that some adults can barely deal with. As children we are dealing with life's problems for the first time. You can see why that would take a toll on us. Life happens and students go to school and deal with bullying, racism, sexism etc. It is natural that kids who internally struggle with themselves will make others feel small to feel a sense of validation and power. It is not right but that is human nature. However some of our bullies are our very own teachers. A student can be literally be on the verge of suicide and a teacher can give a student a hard time or just be blatantly rude. Teachers are different to students than they are to adults. As an adult you cannot just treat adults any type of way without consequences. Teachers use their power over students to do this because lets be real, as students we can complain and complain and it seems like nothing ever changes because no body truly cares. As much as it is said the actions of those in power do not show it. School is supposed to be a safe space but in reality it is not. There are people who take everything that life gives them and use it as motivation and they thrive. Others are not there yet in life as students are children. The education we are gifted with is a blessing. However sometimes the people in the building are the issue. Going to school for 9 months carrying a child is very hard. Kids can be more brutal than adults. Having the ability to take your classes online at home will benefit so many children in the school system. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3454ef37af80,0825571D1A47,Students taking classes online will be very beneficial. My overall reasoning behind this is a lot of the problems that students face is because of the students and the teachers in the building. Online education eliminated those factors. Students distractions will be limited. The environment will be safer. It is sometimes necessary for students to take online classes at home therefore it should always be an option. The big picture is to make our next leading generation more educated than the last. Whatever makes that easier should be employed into our school systems.  ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f131945d7c1d,082598CC8955,I think that we should be able to have phones out on free time or other reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+39c920d17033,082598CC8955,because maybe theirs a reason that we need are phones out like if there's a in emergency if we forget something you never know what can happen ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+210e12150fb0,082598CC8955,or you can text but you can never have it out in class or the teacher can take it and keep it until a parent comes and pick it up and they have to sign a paper to get the phone. I agree that we should only let them take the phone if there using it in class but like when we are switching to are class we can talk or text for a min but when class starts then no cell phones. But are school we cant have are phones out until the end of the day and we have to wait until we get outside its like unfair. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b3e69a7d2d79,082598CC8955,it is ok for us to have are phones out like a lunch or on are free time. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+71be598a0c95,083C3AE77587,With the election coming up in 2016 the debate for how the election should be run is now in dispute. So what does that mean? That means that some people disagree with the way our election is run and some dont. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8e5c626b1810,083C3AE77587,In my opinion the electoral voting system is unfair and outdated. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a0c49394d0c8,083C3AE77587,My first reason is the electoral college is not fair to the small states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0b148fb9ed5,083C3AE77587,Because small states only get a small number of electoral votes canidates do not visit the small states that often. So how is that fair? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1f27c5cd749,083C3AE77587,My second reason is why not just let the poplar vote choose who is the president? After all the poplar vote is the only honest way of doing things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+faf61e0b76cb,083C3AE77587,The canidate that has the most votes in a poplar vote should win every time. That way is fair. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3eb7d2155c0b,083C3AE77587,My third and final reason is with the electoral voting system there is actually a chance of tying. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+04e2d2d431e8,083C3AE77587,if they tye what do you do now? Should we flip a coin to see who wins possibly one of the most important descisons ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e777f7238396,085CACF9DE2B,"Some think that driverless cars are in our future. Others think that driverless cars are, and should stay, merely a product of science fiction. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+69b8aaeef5bb,085CACF9DE2B,I believe that driverless cars are not a good idea. Driverless cars are not a good idea for several reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+514b282bc789,085CACF9DE2B,The first and most obvious reason is safety. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d5e144be41c7,085CACF9DE2B,A second reason is the large cost of manufacturing these cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e832d638cef7,085CACF9DE2B,"And finally, a third reason we do not need driverless cars in this day and age, is people would forget how to drive a regular car or neglect to even learn if the car drove itself. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dfb087eef01a,085CACF9DE2B,The first reason that society does not need driverless cars is safety. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eca4a419382f,085CACF9DE2B,"Of course, people can argue that if a car were to drive itself, there would be less accidents. It is true that driverless cars could reduce accidents from drunk driving and other impaired states, or just simple driving errors. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+dec2e26505a0,085CACF9DE2B,"However, some of these problems are easy to prevent now. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+74c970ec8adf,085CACF9DE2B,"It is illegal to drive under the influence of alcohol or drugs. The simple solution is not to do it. Most crashes caused from simple driving mistakes could be prevented as well. The problem is the driver, not the car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+077e9fcd5d94,085CACF9DE2B,"In addition, driverless cars would be at an increased risk for technolgical malfunctions causing potentially fatal crashes. As of right now, the technology in driverless cars is only experimental and theoretical. It would take many years to iron out all the bugs, so to speak, to make these cars function properly all the time. As mentioned paragrpah nine of the article, in most of the Unites States, it is illegal to test drive driverless cars. It is illegal for these very reasons. It is illegal because experimenting with that kind of technology is dangerous. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95a8c7d926c1,085CACF9DE2B,A second reason that driverless cars are not necessary is the unimaginable cost it would be to manufacture these cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2bfe742fb492,085CACF9DE2B,"In addition, millions of dollars would be spent first to research and perfect the workings of the driverless cars. Not to mention, driverless cars would probably cost a larger sum of money than regular cars because of the time and cost of manufacturing them. In the past few years, in the United States has been going through a financial crisis. While our economy is now doing better, where would the money to fund these cars come from? In the article, the author mentions building smarter roads for cars. If that was the case, it would cost even more to fund this grand scheme. So much money is spent on paving and repairing roads every year, it would cost so much more to have to change or rebuild all of the roads in the country. In addition, if cars were to drive themselves, many laws would have to be changed for the new cars. Right now in the United States, one in five children will go hungry, there are clearly more important things to spend money on right now than to fund driverless cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0a5ec69e2dd,085CACF9DE2B,"A third and final reason that we do not need driverless cars is if we did, people would forget how to drive a regular car, or neglect to even learn. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+61cb5e6cc7f0,085CACF9DE2B,"The article mentions that cameras might be needed to ensure people pay attention to the road. There are already enough distractions for drivers to worry about. Texting and driving has become a major issue in recent years. Imagine how easy it would be to be distracted by a phone or other device if the car you were in were driving itself? This is a slippery slope. It starts out with relatively small things, such as not paying full attantion to the road if the car drove itself. But soon, if people did not have to worry about traffic laws and safety, then they would soon forget them. Hypothetically speaking, what if someone who had been driving a driverless for a period of time one day had to go back to driving a regular one. This person may still have their liscense, but would they be able to pass a test for it now? Problems like this would make the road more dangerous than it already is. In addition, that same person who is now driving a regular car, may forget that he or she is controlling the car, being that they were so used to the car driving itself. There is enough reckless driving, that we do not nead people operating vehicles with no memory of how to do it! Or people might even neglect to learn how to drive a regular car at all if they depended on a driverless car all the time. If society allowed this to happen, the results could be catastrophic. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b23e57f80de,085CACF9DE2B,"In conclusion, driverless cars are not a good idea. Maybe in the distant future if more problems that we are currently dealing with are resolved, but not at this time. Driverless cars are not currently safe, and will not be for many years to come. They would cost a significant amount of money, money that can be spent elsewhere for better causes, especially when we already have cars that work perfectly fine. Finally, driverless cars are not a good idea because they could cause people to forget how to drive a regular car, which could lead to a very dangerous and potentially deadly situation. There are benefits of driverless cars, however there are even more downfalls to the idea that certainly outweigh the benefits.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d7d768de8f23,0878DADF1B3C,I firmly believe that we should keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a039165ecfa8,0878DADF1B3C,"Many people say that it is ""outdated, irrational, and unfair"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0121133dcfd0,0878DADF1B3C,but that is an opion.  Their are meany rational reasons about why the Electoral College is benificaial rather then destructive. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+713005eafd0e,0878DADF1B3C,Everyones President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbd3c315dcbc,0878DADF1B3C,"Swing States. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee41020904e9,0878DADF1B3C,"""The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have a trans-reginal appeal.  No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1bef6e4e438,0878DADF1B3C,"In PLumers article he states that, ""candiadtes dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the the tight races in the ""swing"" states. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e19fb7cc2740,0878DADF1B3C,The Electoral College assures that the President isnt just wanted in one area that is wanted all around the country.  Electoral Colleges assure that the President is wanted in many differt parts of the United States. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+af632855d33c,0878DADF1B3C,"Some people argue about the Electoral College turning off potential voters, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fd071b7455b3,0878DADF1B3C,but this may actually determine the election.  ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2ab7968f3ccb,0878DADF1B3C,If those other party people dont vote who knows mabey if they had voted their party might have been luckly.  Statistics prove that when certaint parties win contriversial states thats because some people from 1 party didnt vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2c12f406d894,0878DADF1B3C,"No voting especailly in swing states can make your party, or your wanted candiadate loose the election.  Every year some of the swing states change so everyone should vote especially those in the swing states to insure your party or your candidate win. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+46d5e87cb3b1,0878DADF1B3C,"The Electoral College is something that this country needs for our benifit.  It helps us Americas get a President that will benifit us all not just those in certaint areas.  Although some peopel dont think that the Electoral College is helping there are twice as many people who believe that just a popularity vote is a bad idea.  Having swing states, and having a way that finds ""everyones"" president are just few of the many exaples about why we need the Electoral College. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c9950ec542bb,088C3E8EBAE7,I write to argue in favor of the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8a1d4e1bdf2c,088C3E8EBAE7,"The Electoral College is as it says on the 3rd source ""widely regarded as an anchronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidates who receives the most popular votes the winner."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fe54df790286,088C3E8EBAE7,"First of all, I would like to start by saying that the Electoral College is helpful to avoid problems where no candidate got a majority. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb74bc4b643b,088C3E8EBAE7,"For example in the 5th part of the source 3 it says ""Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both  had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College (301 and 370 electoral votes, respectively)"" which backs up my claim. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e3a26a1f8cd6,088C3E8EBAE7,"I understand the ""wrong"" part of it like in the 2nd source it says ""If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Karry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry."" meanning voters vote for a slate of electors and they choose the president. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c2a10bfed65d,088C3E8EBAE7,"Honestly I dont see it as that ""wrong"" but thats my opinion. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0ee0e55fc4d4,088C3E8EBAE7,"Second, I agree with the Electoral College despite the lack of ""democratic pedigree"" for five reasons. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+746488456bd2,088C3E8EBAE7,"First, ""Certainty of Outcome"" meanning winning candidate's share of the Electoral College exceeds his share of the popular vote, example, Obama vs Romney. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dea80c33f929,088C3E8EBAE7,"Second, in the Everyone's President part it says that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president, for example, ""Romney was in the South, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6773da8800bb,088C3E8EBAE7,"Number 3, ""Swing States"" the ""winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates-as we saw in [2012] election-to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8b238a41f4dd,088C3E8EBAE7,"There is also number 4 where the Electoral College ""restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution"" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69f6acbc2370,088C3E8EBAE7,"number 5, ""Avoid Run-Off Elections"" which is what I used in the second paragraph as a claim. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fe0f7fc9200,088C3E8EBAE7,In summation im in favor with the Electoral College for many reasons. After reading through this side and the opponing side of the argument I can honestly say that I prefer this method as it is. Yes there is a bad side to it but there is a bad side to everything and it shouldn't be big enough for anyone to oppose it. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e9a9dfc2edcf,08BE7B30414F,I agree with Bob Dole about abolishing the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ee8e11207e99,08BE7B30414F,The Electoral College is unfair to the voters. It's called the diaster factor for a reason. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc629c9fc181,08BE7B30414F,"The American people should be able to vote for who they want. It states that when a person votes you are clearly voting for a slate of electors not the president himself. The Winner-take-all system in each state, candidiates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states.
+
+The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. It is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b8dc114908c,08BE7B30414F,"No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. Residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised- to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6600ecaf77ee,08BE7B30414F,"Should residents of another region feel like their votes do not count? No, they shouldn't each vote should be counted in order for the president to get into The White House. The president is their president as well as mine and yours and they shouldn't have to feel as if he wasn't and wouldn't want to know what their interest were. They should be treated equally. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6f1db61ef2e,08BE7B30414F,In the big states the Electoral College it restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2c17870822cf,08BE7B30414F,"Other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campain than a small one does.. Every state should have the same amount of attention, not be treated differently.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5b39fe1bb510,08E7FC23D9C9,"I'm in favor of changing to election by popular votes for the president of the
+
+United States,  ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6e448d883915,08E7FC23D9C9,"under the electoral college system they voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d0699334d50,08E7FC23D9C9,"According to the aragument of changing election by popular votes the author says that the electoral collage is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in each state, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e39a9f94a4c,08E7FC23D9C9,"this shows that is unfair to vote for someone who takes all the system  in each state, the author also mentions that during the 2000 campaig. seventeen states didn't see that candidates at all, this includes South Carolina and voters iin 25 of the largest media markets, one evidence from the text is when the author mentions that the election is only a few swing voters away catastrophe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41e99c9dbb16,08E7FC23D9C9,"The electoral college is a process that consists of electors the majority of the electal votes is required to elec the president, each candidaate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors, for this reason in the following discussion, the word ""state"" also refers to the District of Columbai. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59fff4f32d8f,08E7FC23D9C9,In sum they both are a good way to select the president but to select the president by popular votes is more acordable than the other argumenet.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8ac4e559348a,08FBDF474AA2,"I would know if it was real or not if only i had seen it with my own eyes but, im against the fact that they're saying that it's a real face made by the aliens because nobody would really think that there are aliens living in space. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f33c28940528,08FBDF474AA2,"I also would know that it's not a face of the pharoah because the text says that it's a ""huge rock formation"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+319fe27d59b9,08FBDF474AA2,"Nobody would really think that aliens created a face that big, even if there were aliens living in space i would not think that those type of creatures have any clue of how to build big structure like that. Only if i were out there in space looking at the face then i would know my self that it's real or not. A humans eye could tell if anything is real or not. If the world had something to prove that it's not a face then i would be with them and i would agree to everything they say about it, cause the person who thought that it was a face built by the aliens then i bet the majority of the peoples would disagree ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92413e6169f2,08FBDF474AA2,All im trying to say is that i dont't believe that the aliens would build a face like structure. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a660a8a9fae7,08FC0154E0EF,"Well,I think students can be benefit this program,if they can work at home by the way of online or video conferencing ",Position,Adequate,,,
+73fe405ba88e,08FC0154E0EF,because students have more opotuniry to study like have more time to work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+312e422f2a67,08FC0154E0EF,they don't need to walk or take a bus to come school ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ceb729e0ed8,08FC0154E0EF,",students can feel better when they try to stury because in his home there is not people talking a lot abuot things,but people talking not about the class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0bd0abafb81b,08FC0154E0EF,Also student can choose the time to they can star the classes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7480543e377e,08FC0154E0EF,"because some students have to work in a job, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64938071cb23,08FC0154E0EF,"so when is cold outside and students they don't like to come school,they can wort at home by the way of online or video conferencing ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0adb82cec288,08FC0154E0EF,students can be more responseble ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6e12efb3500,08FC0154E0EF,"Some students feel good working at home,there is not streess for them,they can take a break,they can eat and his work. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+372871e10702,08FC0154E0EF,"But also is depent waht classes student do you are,because some student are lazy when they work at home. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b64da36edd67,08FC0154E0EF,Also parent can check his work in look if they do his work good or bad ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4b722490e27,08FC0154E0EF,inconclution students have benefit from being able to attend classes from home.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+bb145dff6a68,09035E72A3AE,I think students shouldn't have at least a B average on their grade to participate in sports or other activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+de0633be6f20,09035E72A3AE,some students try very hard in school but don't have good grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba813215e3ce,09035E72A3AE,"lots of students like sports or any other activities but they don't have the grades for it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3fc54bd4a12,09035E72A3AE,"its just not fair to students that have bad grades but are good and intelligent that they have to improve to be able to participate in a activity. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5e121be3ea1,09035E72A3AE,"There are students that try very hard in school but cant get higher than a C on their grade, wile others don't even have to try to get an A.
+
+But some students try even harder than students that have an A but they can only get a C. Its not easy to get a good grade you have to try but sometimes when you try your hardest it doesn't work out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+edfd763f67d0,09035E72A3AE,"Lots of students love to participate in activities, its good to stay active and to have fun in school. But when some of that fun is taken away because you don't have a specific grade it can become a problem for some students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8774731d0308,09035E72A3AE,Those are the reasons that students shoulent have good grades ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6199a67cde21,0910E011143F,"Community Service is very important, it's important because how will we live in this community if we don't keep it clean ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3e4f01412fcc,0910E011143F,I think that students should have to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+91382cee736f,0910E011143F,"We as kids should learn more about service, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+949c022baed1,0910E011143F,"when the future comes we will know, how and what to do to keep our community clean. Also, students should do this because, we do make most of the mess that, we should just clean it up. But, if students do not want to do service then we should not make such a big mess, we should just clean up after ourselve ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b74bcafdb242,0910E011143F,Doing community service could also hep us students in a way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b53c79f9c5d,0910E011143F,". In High School doing community service gives you a ""leg up"" for college. Well you get an extra stamp on your diploma and colleges look for things like that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+811b6fee0d4a,0910E011143F,"Helping the community will make everybody grateful; everyone will be happy that people are actually doing something to help their community. All in all this will help the community immensely.
+
+We will not only be keeping the community clean but we will be helping everyone. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+817d0ea30e28,091315F8E9A9,"As you may know, there is a huge dilema with the voting system we have as of right now. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2697e1b26e43,091315F8E9A9,I am writing to you because it is in our best interest to abolish the Electoral College and change election to popular vote for the next presidential election. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+08232f940951,091315F8E9A9,"The reasons we should make this change is because the Electoral College is unfair for voters, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+108dd11cee01,091315F8E9A9,also a disaster waiting to happen ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb3944bfd494,091315F8E9A9,the popular voting system bring so many more benefits and opportunities for the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac0e86f54dcb,091315F8E9A9,The Electoral system simply takes away the people's say on who they think the best candidate is. It is simply unfair for the voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a56baedf2d80,091315F8E9A9,"In this system, according to the second source, popular vote, which is what the majority people select, most of the time loses the election due to the Electoral System. An Example used in this source was the 2000 election with Al Gore, he had won the popular vote, but had lost the election thanks to the Electoral College. With this system in play, voters cannot control who they want to vote for and that is not how it should be. In source one, it clearly states most states have a ""winner-take-all"" type of system that awards all electors of that state to the specific candidate, which is the complete opposite of benefiting the people, because not everyone in that state wants to vote for that specific candidate. Source 3 says big states that a larger state gets more attention than a smaller state does because of the amount of votes, however some states claim they never even got to see a presidential campaign had because of how small the states was. Its is Unfair to these states which include Rhode Island, South Carolina. It takes away opportunities from these smaller states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c38f6e82f36,091315F8E9A9,"In source two, Bradford Plumer mentions the single best argument against the Electoral College, which he calls the ""disaster factor"". ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d05d07d55a6d,091315F8E9A9,"Voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. This means that voters dont really have control on who they vote for, as mentioned before. The Electors can defy the will of the people, the only reason people vote, in this system, is to ""sway the opinion"". This is known as the ""disaster factor"", the electors defying the will of the people. Another problem with this system is that if there is a tie, it is definately out of the peoples choice. The decision is left to the House Of Representatives. The Electoral College is a disaster waiting to happen, like a bomb ticking, at some point in time, it will explode. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c87dcae470e8,091315F8E9A9,"The benefits of switching to popular vote really pays off. With popular vote, these issues adressed would not be a problem at all ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0617763a967,091315F8E9A9,"such as the unfairness to voters, the disasters awaiting to happen with the Electoral College. The only downside to this is that it will take a little longer to count the votes and finalize the election, but it is worth it. All voters would be at peace of mind knowing that their vote actually counted for something. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e8ed6944a79,091315F8E9A9,"In my opinion, this is the best choice and option out there. We need to get rid of the Electoral College because it brings us no good at all. We could finally stop worrying about the timer! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f0dc8192511b,091375884D88,"For many people politics is a very serious topic that people strongly believe in. recently, there has been alot of contraversy about keeping the Electoral College process or changing the election by popular vote, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7808f2920eef,091375884D88,in my opinion the Electoral college process was established to prevent the option of President by popular vote that just dosnt seem fair. ,Position,Effective,,,
+35c8e0161d8a,091375884D88,"Citizens are going to be angry either way the president is elected because its about who is running our country and representing it, not about how he or she is elected. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+627adc5fa424,091375884D88,"We as American citizens should have the right to choose/vote for the president we want representing our country 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+2ddccb320b1b,091375884D88,". From my knowledge, Under the Electoral college system, voters vote not only for the president, but for a slate of electors. ""Richard Nixon, Jimmy carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. chamber of commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time agreed on getting ride of the electoral college!"" for example Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Why dosnt the goverment just give us what we want?
+
+if 90% of votes go to a candidate, then why would they not get the presidency? its common sense. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dcde483dc70d,091375884D88,"The electoral college process has the govenor prepare a ""Certificate of ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of the respective electors. the certificate also declares the winner of the election so people arent even aloud to have a say in the voting process. ""during the 2000 campaign seventeen states didnt even see the candidates at all, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d3572c04820,091375884D88,I think that is completly irrational. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c21e54255577,091375884D88,The electoral college is widely regarded as a non-democratic way of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00744ea8eaa7,091375884D88,"If the electoral vote happened to be a tie then the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. of course we would have no control over the vote if that happened so we would just have to accept it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d01c24b586be,091375884D88,I hope i have made my point across about the Electoral college system. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9837456f5ed3,09281EFF7A66,"The Electoral college is a way of voting for Presidency. Electors are the people who consist of that. Their are 538 electors. A majority of the 270 votes is required to elect a president, The 23rd amendment of the constitution states that 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. The candidate's political party generally choose the electors. The Presidential election is held every 4 years on the tuesdaay after the first monday in november. Most of the states have a winner takes all system except Nebraska and maine. After the presidental election, the governer prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"". 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+63f19d2f6dd7,09281EFF7A66,These are Cons about electoral college ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2f4e30546d0,09281EFF7A66,"Voters dont vote for a president,But for a state elector. The disaster factor is the best argument against the electoral college. The electoral college is irrational,outdated and unfair, And the arguments have pros that are assertions without basis in reality. The Electoral college is not democratic in a modern sense. The electoral college is also a anachronism. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c032549f24c5,09281EFF7A66,The Electoral colloge is a process that is full wit pros and it also has its small and enormous cons.               ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+77c5cd003209,093BD0824B7E,"As time progresses in history, we often look back and see the notable advancements humans have made over the years such as the creation of fire, the discovery of new resources like oil, and the creation of the steam engine. Advancements have also been made in learning as well, as we have gone from using chalk boards to using smart electronic boards. Now we must take learning a step further with the introduction the use of online resources when the student cannot attend a class in person. Some schools offer an option for students to attend a class with means of video conferencing or any other online means instead of attending in person. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9b85ccdb9231,093BD0824B7E,"All schools should have the option of attending classes through online means, as it will greatly benefit students, perhaps more than attending classes in person. ",Position,Effective,,,
+745540cbf148,093BD0824B7E,Schools should have the option of attending classes through online means because the student may not be able to attend due to them being out of town. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6097180f2f7f,093BD0824B7E,"A student may be traveling during this time, and it may not be up to them whether they want to travel or not as their parents could force them to come along to travel with them. Or, it could be that they have to go out of town for a while due to a family emergency. The student has no control over this and therefore cannot attending the class; however, if they could access an online resource and schedule a video conference with the teacher when they are in class teaching, the student won't miss any important material and still not be in the room as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+58799702b295,093BD0824B7E,Schools should have the option of attending the classes through online means because the student may not be comfortable around their classmates. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+524a9a6a8c84,093BD0824B7E,"Around middle and high school, classes aren't the only thing become harder, there is also pressure regarding students and their peers. Many teenage students may have a difficult time focusing in a classroom due to another students presence there which throws the student off. It could be whether it is a romantic interest, a bully, or someone who does not treat them well and makes them feel uncomfortable when they are in their presence. Or it could be that the student isn't comfortable around new people or doesn't like to be in a crowded place and prefer to be alone or in an environment in which they are used too. Regardless, it affects the student and negatively impacts their studies. If the student could attend a class through online means, or have a video conference with the teacher when they are teaching, they could still learn the material they need to know while at the same time staying in an environment where the student is comfortable in and not having to deal with peers who make the student feel uncomfortable. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+627141f5a371,093BD0824B7E,"However, some may argue that some students will abuse this system so they could stay home because they wish to skip class and be lazy or maybe just want to stay home. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+955aa06e2933,093BD0824B7E,"While this may be true, not all students are like this, and if they abuse the system it will ultimately harm them. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5e140e3e1f0c,093BD0824B7E,"They will not learn the material they need and therefore won't succeed in the future when they need the information regarding the material the most. Furthermore, schools should have the option of attending classes through online means because the student may be sick. It is common for students to get sick once a while and therefore cannot come to school and must stay home to avoid the risk of getting others sick with things like the flu. So, if their school had the option to attend a class using an online resource, the student could be at home recovering while still learning the material they need. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dce856dad915,093BD0824B7E,"All schools must have the option of attending classes through online means, as it will benefit the student in so many ways, such as learning the material even while being sick, out of town, or just uncomfortable around others. While it is good that some schools do offer the option of attending classes with online resources like video conferencing, it is crucial that we help and make sure that all schools do this. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea25e8d2897d,09483BB18BC3,"The electoral college has existed since the founding fathers established it in the consistution as a way to elect a presedential canidate. What the electoral college is, it is a ""compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" What the electoral college does instead of electing a preseident through a popular vote, it is electing through a electoral vote, that means if you are voting your votes are actually counted towards the electors of the canidates. Each candiate has it's own slate of electors, in wich you are voting for them, and they will make the decision of deciding who is president of the U.S.
+
+A presidential canidate can have more popular votes then the other candiate, meaning votes favored by the people, but if a president has more electoral votes, which is votes by the electors then they are elected as the president. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8a3c958cd350,09483BB18BC3,"The benefits of the electoral college is this, 1. Presidents who are favored greatly in a certain region of the U.S., will most likely not have a electoral appeal. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4b941e255d1a,09483BB18BC3,"That means such as president Romney can have a strong appeal in the south, but he will gain no electoral vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13320ab19518,09483BB18BC3,""" The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recevies a majority of the votes cast. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+393900716072,09483BB18BC3,"For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College. There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast, that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presedential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invaraiably produces a clear winner."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3e2ecfbc858,09483BB18BC3,The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Consistution ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+74fadd09e946,09483BB18BC3,"The popular vote was very close in Florida nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes. So other things equal, a large satae gets more attention than a small state does ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ec441c7faf1b,09483BB18BC3,We need to put an end to the Electoral College now. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8ae75fe3adc9,09483BB18BC3,"The reason why we need to start now is because it isn't fair for a group of electors to vote for the president, when the votes of the people are pretty much worthless. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0368a04d3940,09483BB18BC3,"Electors of the candidates sometimes don't even vote for the their own candiate, they sometimes vote for the opposistion by betrayal! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ece1aa81d7b0,09483BB18BC3,As for the popular vote it would be much easier to vote only by the people. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5993226f2d6a,09483BB18BC3,Even though the problem of Al Gore and George W. Busch occuer more than a decade ago the issue can occuer again. That's why we need to place only a popular vote where we can avoid problems like in 2000 and have the people's vote count! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28f3adbe9a34,09483BB18BC3,The Electoral College is unfair because it is unfair to voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2a7e06f2c8e,09483BB18BC3,"the iea of winner-take-all system in each state candiate don't even spend time in states they know they will not gain favor in. ""Focusing only the ""swing states"" which is a more tighter race."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+687fd714daa7,09483BB18BC3,"Worst thing that can happen if there is a tie in the Electoral College, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2685f41d22f,09483BB18BC3,"in that case the vote would be thrown to the House of Represenatives, and who knows what can happen in that matter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6763877892c8,09483BB18BC3,Electoral college is fair to the eye of an elector. Is it though favored by the people knowing that their popular vote is pointless of a final president? ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d250937cfda3,0969066E81F6,I think we should keep our Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9288d9498367,0969066E81F6,its fair if we get to choose our president and he or she wins then he or she should be president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+80b30793ad73,0969066E81F6,"Some people should consider themselves lucky because of what happened in 2000 with that fiasco and it was the biggest election crisis in a century. Even though there is 270 votes required to vote for the president, whats fun about that is because there be more  votes and atleast people participate in them. Choosing our president is best because when your voting for the president your voting for state electors ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d6c21f68c4b,0969066E81F6,it gives chances for people that want to be president or senator. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+763fa3b9a08c,0969066E81F6,"It also gives them a chance to show and see who would do more for our country,like for example when they do their campaign commercials and what i look at is who does the best. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+86fc065a913c,0969066E81F6,Thats what i think about if it should be changed or not ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6fc469ce89bc,097FE8053507,A grade C average is low for participating in sports. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d422b7822e6f,097FE8053507,A grade B average is enough because it's not too low and you're making good grades and such. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a25f4a8210f5,097FE8053507,"A person with the grade C average will put pressure on them and they may fail because they're not putting much effort just for sports. Grade C average is good but still, the person can just think of sports and not care about grades because it's in the requirements. A person with a B average can definitely do the job because they have good grades and they can do well in school AND in sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77d46ec0b272,097FE8053507,"Students having a grade C average may be lazy and probably be even lazier on the field when playing sports because they don't care about making good grades, just about the sports they're into. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4269aa0b130e,097FE8053507,"If the students with a C average wants to play sports, they still can't play because they're not making A' s or B' s, and it's unfair for all the grade D average kids out there. And it's just too bad for the C' s and D' s the students are making and they think they're doing good. You might spoil them if you're just telling them to play sports with their about-to-be-low-grade. They should make good grades like an A or a B so it will give themselves confidence and a non-lazy attitude for them to participate in any sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0f683056bec,097FE8053507,"If you let them play in school activities with students who have a grade C average, they may fail in school because they are putting a lot of effort in sports instead of homework. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+464cb600e228,097FE8053507,They can have school spirit but at the same time they can have some time to put aside for some homework and study for a test or something else important for their grades to improve. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2feda0a85ab,0A5BA91AA8B5,I think the you should follow the second phones at school because they can lose their phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4ffda972ebc,0A5BA91AA8B5,some reasons are they can lose their phone at school. its a rule at any school and any thing can happen. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+180e124e265e,0A5BA91AA8B5,you should also follow the first policy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe41b6f03dea,0A5BA91AA8B5,"students may need to contact their parents or if they are in any after school programs like cheerleading, basketball etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f49f2188170e,0A5BA91AA8B5,I think they should be able to bring their phones just turn them off because there so many reason why they need their phone. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c2da254edd98,0A5BA91AA8B5,Then again they shouldn't bring their phone because they might text during class taking up the time they need so they can learn ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ec437d197215,0A5BA91AA8B5,"Many principal many get many complaints about their students having their phones in school I believe they cant do any thing about it, if one of their students phone goes off they shouldn't be able to take it but if it was out in plain view then they can take it but i think at the end of that class period they should be able to get it back but the teacher have to turn it off and let them know they cant turn it back on till the end of the day when they go home. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d824d4d23946,0A5BA91AA8B5,From point of view i believe that we should be able to have are phones in case of in emergency because we never know when somebody at school gets hurt o injured if they don't have any contacts on that student because they weren't allowed to bring phones to school its really falls down on that school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5a4004893b0b,0A6C0B6D3925,I think policy 1 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+acd07b8fb781,0A6C0B6D3925,because at lunch all we doing is eating and talking at the table and we should be able to text not call people when we eating. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2dd806d69b9e,0A6C0B6D3925,An at free times we should be able to do anything ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d075954fdbc2,0A6C0B6D3925,At least ever body is not doing with there class work. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f24e0e36b200,0A6C0B6D3925,We should not just being doing nothing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5802ab5882b9,0A6C0B6D3925,"just staring at people talking loud missing other people work up. we should be able to text or call people in our free times. We should be able to listen to our music, play games, on our phones. An we changing class we should turn our phones off or put it on silent. Just in case. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd1b6502af2e,0A6C0B6D3925,It we impossible to not bring it to school. Because what if is a emergency that one of your family members got hurt and your parents need you to be ready at the office. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cea332dda614,0A6C0B6D3925,A sometimes we should not bring our phones ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+20c32ead0841,0A6C0B6D3925,"cause somebody can steal your phone. An your phone can go off and u didn't know nothing about it and you can be tell the truth that u didn't know about it and they still don't believe you then a teacher or the principal can keep it, and you might have a conference with the teacher and the principal with your parents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0533d62eeb82,0A6F7ECC5B8F,"When were voting for president were not technically voting for the presient in fact we are voting for the slate of electors. The electors can be anyone without a public holding office. Electoral college process is not a good processs for presidency. While a president can get the majority of the popular vote; on the other hand, he could have the minority of the electoral college votes. That president would lose the elecetion even though he technicallly had the most votes. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+492d4c5b7efa,0A6F7ECC5B8F,"We should change the process into popular votes for the president. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+21dd275ba98b,0A6F7ECC5B8F,The electoral college can or will defy the will of the people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f850cc651290,0A6F7ECC5B8F,"The article ""The indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong' ,by Bradford Plumer it quoted ,Back in 1960,segregationists in the Louisana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose Jhon F. Kennedy.(So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy).The election whould have gone the other way if the due to the electoral college. The electoral college are way too risky to take on. just simply couple of unwilling electors can change the tide of the election. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db5a076e1d4c,0A6F7ECC5B8F,The electoral college is a unfair process becausse of the winner-take-all system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f173d71f73e,0A6F7ECC5B8F,"In the article called What Is The Electoral College"", by the office of the Federeal register it quoted most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. In the other article  ""The indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong' ,by Bradford Plumer it quoted , candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the swing states. Electoral  college is a unfair process because of the winner take it all. The winner takes it all system is a unfair process for the American citizens. even with a slightly change in the electoral college could change the tide or even cause a tie in the election.
+
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c8764bfcb775,0A6F7ECC5B8F,"In conclusion,The electoral college is a unfair process that has cause presidential election to change. The best results for electing president is by the popular vote. Obviously popular votes sounds more efficient and a clean election. The winner-takes it all process counterfits the number of american citizens voting result. Eletoral college process is an extra step to the election with more problems than barely any benefits. Electoral  college should be change and alter in to a different process with clean votes that'll actually be fair for once.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d9f9ebc254f2,0AA8E5C89F0F,I know that you have been contemplating on whether or not it should be a requirement for the students of our school to perform community services. I think it would be in your best interest to read the letter i have taken the time to type for you. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+2c03eb99f9f3,0AA8E5C89F0F,I believe that community service should be a completely voluntary thing. But i do think that you should initiate a school wide punishment for those caught littering on campus. ,Position,Effective,,,
+4ba92acafca1,0AA8E5C89F0F,I believe that most kids don't want to do volunteer work or community service because it doesn't appeal to their interest. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eeb95649f5d3,0AA8E5C89F0F,"But i do believe that if you were to schedule field trips where we were able to go to a national park or something of the sort, students would be more enthusiastic about helping to clean the environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8057acaf5433,0AA8E5C89F0F,"f you do use the things that i have mentioned, i would like to receive full credit for the inspiration of my ideas. Because i believe in giving credit, where credit is due. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+82aaff544f57,0AC09FD13E72,"This might be the hundreth letter opened about this electoral college topic, but this is a very important subject that needs to be run by all of our citizens. Honestly the electoral college is very important because of the fact that after elections after everyone has voted they are the ones that are the electors for the President and the Vice President. Its not like it was made for no reason it was made to make the elections fair, it's not like it's the first time people have wanted to get abolish the Electoral College even many people have wanted to remove this like for example Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and more but this dosnt mean that it is the right choice. Yes it is agreed that there are some downs to have the Electoral College, plus even the person that the Electoral College votes fo that might not be the person most of the nation choose. Like now in the 2012 elections Obama had more Electoral votes than Romney""Because almost all states award the electorsl votes on a winner-takes all basis."" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c9af85124769,0AC09FD13E72,So yes that is why the electoral college shouldn't be removed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b67ea061ab78,0AC09FD13E72,"But the Electoral College also have rules in this article by Richard Posner ""The Electoral College reguires a presidential candidate to have no tran-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect President."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e72e0ceff31b,0AC09FD13E72,"Like think about it if one of the big states for example lets say Texas wants to vote for canidate but two smaller states want to vote for another canidate but they don't have enough votes to compete with that one big state then the bigger states would always wn the elections and that dosnt make the elections fair like thet should be and that just makes it worse that ""it is"" now beacuse with the electoral college it makes the voting fair because they can see the what all the states want and they can choose who is right for the poisition. People might have other opinions and that is completley fine but at the end of the day a disision has to made and it would be best if it was the best desision for the people being made. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d1c4a3c89bd,0AC09FD13E72,"Now back to what the downsides are of the electral college ""The single best argument against the electoral college what we might call the dissaster factor."" a part of Bradford Plumer's article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7457e3f2bd5b,0AC09FD13E72,"Even just in the name of that article explains everything that event he ""best"" type of system can be a dissaster, and the entire article cannot be quoted but hopefully with that one quote the point will get across to the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f8173e8b483,0AC09FD13E72,"Everyone should read some sourses before making an disision like this. Not just the people voting so that even the people not voting will fully understand why one disision is being made and whyone isnt being made. This one thing can affect the way electing president will be from now on to the future, unless they deside they want to change it again. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+700503883760,0AC09FD13E72,"All in all one letter will not change everyone's opinion but it seems like the people who want to remove the electoral college are anachronism instead of the electoral college themselfs it seems like they want to remove them so that the winner take all system will be better on there half so that the running canidate can appeal to the bigger states and win most of their votes.""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to expresss a political preferance rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election."" There is nother more that can be said but the reason why this letter was written in the first place, to keep the electoral college.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a7b0d97ab60a,0B2C0C1833BF,I am going to tell you two good reasons about why should community service be only for SCHOOL_NAME ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c299c8276adb,0B2C0C1833BF,First I think that SCHOOL_NAME should be a loud to pickup trash from the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00fa7538c5b4,0B2C0C1833BF,"Other childern want to do something fun like plying games ,talking with they friends and other thangs they like to do ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95b26d30038c,0B2C0C1833BF,community service need to be only for voliters or craminals ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9190bc06eb33,0B2C0C1833BF,I also think that the craminals will have something to do. even they will be picking up garbith they will be happy to be out of jeil. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ddb427e8d3aa,0B2C0C1833BF,TO volatier they have to wear old cloths. they have a seartan time for them to be done. if they are bord at home they can ask the people to do more work with the community service. the people will tell them what ever they want. then the volienters will go home or stay there ware they are at. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b13e8833eb3c,0B2C0C1833BF,I tould you two good reasons why all students should not be forced to do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f64379cc21d7,0B30792F314D,Voting is one of the hardest choices a person has to make because in reality the votes for the american perident can be decided by one or two votes sometimes. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cea79c1d93e1,0B30792F314D,The two deciding factors in voting are the electoral college and the popular vote of the people. They both make the elections fair but also unfair. Without one the whole election process would not be as good as it is today. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40f0403fadf1,0B30792F314D,"The Electoral College is comprised of a total of 538 electors and to elect a president you need a majority of 270 votes from the 538. This electoral college is comprised of one vote for each representative from your state plus two for the senators. Obviously this gives every state a fair chance to vote but even if lets say Hawaii, North Dakota, and South Dakota wanted republican and Texas wanted democrat Texas' votes would cancel out the others because of the amount of representatives they have compared to the other three states ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b68bce6d09a5,0B30792F314D,"This is one thing that makes this form of voting very unfair. Obviously it is smart to give somestates more representatives because of their population but that completly defeats the purpose of making it fair because the small states stand no chance against the densely populated ones like Florida, Texas, California, and New York. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d901607e1d3,0B30792F314D,"The popular vote is the percentage of votes that the president recieves form the people, citizens that are voting for them. The popular vote does not haver as much effect as the Electoral College but it still does make an effect. For example in 2000 when Al Gore had 60% of the popular vote but did not win the presidency because George Bush had the majority of the Electoral College. This is when the popular vote should be more emphasized because obviously the people which is over about 20 Million wanted Gore but the Electoral College vote of more than only 270 people wanted Bush. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cd92fcfb168,0B30792F314D,"That is an issue but also some people voting don't really understand what the two people are offering and just vote because one sounds better, looks cooler, your friends are voting for him/her. This is why the popular voting system cannot be fully trusted. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d6a1e2948271,0B30792F314D,The compare the two topics not one is better than the other and not one can fuction woithout the other. In my perspective it was smart of the founding fathers to create both systems so that the voting would be somewhat fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+625356bfc37f,0B30792F314D,In reality even though the popular vote doesn't make a difference it can persuade the representatives of the state to change their mind or it can make them realize that they are making the right decision because of how their state is chosing to vote. This should change their mind because the people elected them knowing that they will vote for who they promised to vote for and will most likely stay true to their state and to their party. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba6043a6078e,0B30792F314D,In conclusion both system are great together but apart cannot funcion. The founding fathers and leaders of this country cannot be blamed for making this system because there is really no way to make it fair and they did their best to do so. Now think if you were to design the voting system for the United States of America what woudl you do differently or the same.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1db14c638bdf,0B4FAC7A4A8B,I think it is a good idea that the principle is doing that because some students can have a good B average. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5e5e2132e232,0B4FAC7A4A8B,"All they go to do is do they homework correctly and respect their teacher and you know if they want to participate in school activity they could do that. I think it so easy, that the principle is going to do that. Even though this is though but you know if you want to and if you believe there is nothing wrong with that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35e67168f445,0B4FAC7A4A8B,Education is a great thing for everyone you should do your best so you can got a good grade in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86fadbfe1ca6,0B4FAC7A4A8B,A lot of people think that they don't want school but first you gotta think about your future what you want to be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8830ec3c8520,0B4FAC7A4A8B,"If you want to have some fun you got to think hard that even though you still got good grades that doesn't mean that you still not going to treat others the way you suppose to . And we still need to have a good grades in conduct. My opinion about this article is that all the students that have a C average can do better you just got to try, and listen to your teacher do as they say. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4012c7260f3f,0B4FAC7A4A8B,"students don't waste your time take your education seriously, without education you're nothing but only a person, ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4567e00ceb6d,0B52B1F1265B,"I believe that the negative aspects of driverless cars outweigh the positive ones. There are too many complications and problems that are yet to be solved. Driverless cars are a very unique and interesting invention, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+df2c4e7b934c,0B52B1F1265B,but I am not in favor of the development of these cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6b165d0bc00e,0B52B1F1265B,There is a vast number of improvements that still need to be made in order for these cars to function properly. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+19a08e694a60,0B52B1F1265B,Driverless cars have too much technology involved that could easily malfunction and lead to several mishaps. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+63a1f6e5e3cd,0B52B1F1265B,"Looking at paragraph 4 it states that,""Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor."" From this quote, you can already see how complex a driverless car needs to be in order to run efficiently. All of these gadgets have to installed and all of them are very necessary. According to the author in paragraph 4, it also claims, ""The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings."" If the LIDAR malfunctions, then the car has no information on its surroundings. It would be virtually impossible for a driverless car to work without the perfect execution of all these devices. I believe that there is too much room for error. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc6c38a3ddde,0B52B1F1265B,I also am against driverless cars because there is a lack of safety when a driver is not in control of a car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b1965645463b,0B52B1F1265B,"Many states agree with this and do not allow for driverless cars to occupy their roads. In paragraph 9 it explains how,""Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars."" This quote tells you that the traffic laws of numerous states would need to be altered for driverless cars to be allowed. The majority of states believe that they are not safe and restrict their use. Traffic laws as well as liability laws would need to be redone in order to cover the safety. At the end of paragraph 9 it asks,""If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver of the manufacturer?"" This directly correlates to a lack of safety and major complications. In case of an accident, the victim would not know who to blame and in the end would severely suffer. There are way too much obstacles that obstruct the safety of too many citizens with driverless cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+341568e4c441,0B52B1F1265B,driverless cars are not fully capable of running independently. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1919f51032e4,0B52B1F1265B,"With this, you would need to figure out an effective way to alert your driver when their assistance is needed. If the driver could not be alerted, then this could lead to massive consequences. In paragraph 7 it states, ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents."" This quote highlights the neccesity of getting the driver's attention. If in any case the driver was not able to be alerted, the repercussions would be severe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c28c4fbfbca9,0B52B1F1265B,"In my opinion, driverless cars do not need to be developed. The science and technology involved is susceptible to malfunction and could result in many problems. There is a lack of safety when it comes to these cars and various states agree. Also, a driver could be clueless and not listen to the alerts given be the car when it was trying to gain their attention. This could lead to an accident or something even worse. For these reasons, I oppose the development of driverless cars. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6e9d3d79814a,0B57654EDEC1,I think we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+771db03340ff,0B57654EDEC1,i think it is fair majority rules one person has just as much chance as winning the votes as another. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f97ea0adfcb6,0B57654EDEC1,The electoral College will help with votes because the people that don't vote the person that gets the electoral votes still get the same amount of votes even if some people didn't vote at all it won't change. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+610601999447,0B57654EDEC1,But if it was by popular vote then the people that don't vote will make a big impact because you will need more votes to win the election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b8cc83d311db,0B57654EDEC1,I also see it as unfair because the people that voted for one person and the majority is for another person their votes won't have any affect and will be pointless ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a78da81cd32e,0B57654EDEC1,"All the people that vote for one person are useless if the other person wins the majority. With the Electoral College some electors could defy the will of the people and vote for the opposite of what most people voted for. Say the 35 million people in california and 15,000,001 million people vote for one person and 14,999,999 people vote for the other those 14 million peoples votes are pointless with the electoral college and its not fair that the canidate doesn't even get one of those votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2de4c92d66fe,0B57654EDEC1,In conclusion i say just get rid of the electoral college because of all the votes that won't count and all the people that voted and not a single one of their votes goes to who they voted for. If it was by popular vote one person could get majority of the electoral votes but less of the popular votes and if there was no electoral college some of the presidents might not have been president.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ca78ac6a2165,0B5BFD4E5904,"I think all kids should be require to do community service because even do us as kids thinks community is waste of time. It is not a waste of time because community service is something you take time out of your life or day and go help people, help the earth. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5f3ced5893ee,0B5BFD4E5904,"imagine if you don't help the earth probably sometime in the future , you wont be in a world full of sunshine and happiness, but you will be living in a world of darkness and despair. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8cef8a2328e1,0B5BFD4E5904,"I doubt anyone can live in a world like that. There probably wont be no sports, no shopping for good clothes and even some death , instead there will be flatten basketballs and footballs because since no one helped the earth all of our resources would be gone and your parents will lose their jobs so the president can try to make the world good again , raise taxes so less stuff for us kids. If you go to the store there wont be awesome clothes like polo instead there will be some horrible stuff like messed up clothes that hobos be wearing, and i know for a fact no kid want to be wearing them definitely if your a fashion diva. See a world like this isn't the world us kids want. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f815fe372c5a,0B5BFD4E5904,"if you do community service and help people then you might not get rewards the same day, but you will get something good. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f307f4eadb7c,0B5BFD4E5904,"Helping the less fortune or the deaf and blind. Even if the deaf couldn't hear what you said, they can see what you said. What if one day our world is being run by a deaf man or woman, and the reason their all the way at the top is because of you. You help them to read and they grow up to become president just because you took time out of your life to help them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cff12b109303,0B5BFD4E5904,"Overall i think doing community service might be a drag, but its the right thing and you help one or even more lives. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f68c37072a3b,0B6B5E779566,I think the idea of having a principal making everyone in the school have to do community service is good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2b1a948cf89c,0B6B5E779566,"but I could be troubling for some people. There has to be a lot of thought put into making this decision, from the person making the decision and their point of view on it to the people that are going to be affected once the decision is made. All this will have to be thought out taking into consideration the type of community service that is going to be required to do . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f6421c7a03c6,0B6B5E779566,Helping out at a retirement home is a good way of showing your community support and that you care about all the people in your community ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1f8643ce4696,0B6B5E779566,having the transportation to get to where you need to go in order to be able to help out can be a problem. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2803e726316f,0B6B5E779566,"Many of the kids in the school that will be participating in this event cannot drive on their own, they are brought to and from places by their parents. As willingly as this students maybe about helping out, their parents/guardian may not have the time to take them where they need to go. Parents are very busy, not only with their kids, but with work, and adding another thing for them to worry about might not be good. This could also get in the way of their schedule ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+03fa7b524c87,0B6B5E779566,"but this isn't something that has to be done everyday, once a week, is better than nothing. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bf3429a24356,0B6B5E779566,Community service is good in many ways. If students at a young age grow up with the act of helping others around them they will keep that with them for the rest of their life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d18ade5e514,0B6B5E779566,"Growing up helping people with small acts of kindness as simple as getting an elder person a glass of water, helping someone put in groceries, helping out serve food at a homeless shelter will make you a better person inside and out. By helping out others around you with small things can bring big rewards later on. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+807c9fec1ae4,0B6B5E779566,"Other acts that can be done that are simpler, things such as picking up a piece of trash that you see on the floor on your way home. Helping out your little cousin, or neighbor with his/her homework. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f60949d55b69,0B6B5E779566,This acts as little as they may seem will make a difference in the end. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbd249932539,0B6B5E779566,"I think that the idea of having everyone participate in community service is great. Some kids might have difficulties with transportation but minor problems like that can be solved as simply as car pooling with a neighbor or friend, riding a bike which is even better because it helps out the environment, or even walking. And, all these small things that you might have to sacrifice for it, like watching a movie with your friends will be worth it in the end. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+43759215644a,0B80CB0B2F3B,Keeping the Electoral college is a bad idea to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+627243f450bc,0B80CB0B2F3B,We should not have leave up to the electors to make the final vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+edae190c4228,0B80CB0B2F3B,"The Electoral College system has the votors vote but not for the president, but for the slate of electors, that then turns and elect the president off of there own votes.
+
+As a soon to be voter it will be better to let the voters make the desion on who our president should be. All Americans should have the choice of saying who going to be president over us for the 2 or 4 years. I dont feel Electoral College is needed in this case. votes need to be taking with the population of votes that are sumitted by us the voters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7503b6dc3159,0B80CB0B2F3B,The Electoral College was a good idea that we had been using. It consists of 538 electors but 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6c7be884d080,0B80CB0B2F3B,Less electors need to needed and more of the population vote needs to be added in to the final election. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+cbf1bacd4932,0B80CB0B2F3B,After learning all the things i didnt know it was very interesting. I really think that by using our population vote will be a better thing to do. The Electoral College seems like a very dificult process. Hopefully one day you will change this process of how the president gets elected. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+849bbdf3317d,0B8629C697D5,"Anybody should be able to vote like teenagers,and aldults because the Electoral College is a process,they consists of the selection of the electors, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4f843d8424c0,0B8629C697D5,"at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+3d05f32b9f3f,0B8629C697D5,"First,
+
+The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electors votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotmentof electors equals the numbers of members in it's Congressional delegation:one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for you Senators. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+30d58dccc7cb,0B8629C697D5,"The Electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of votes,while winning a majority in the Electoral College. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+72992f16d59c,0B8629C697D5,It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e8e2aaee93c,0B8629C697D5,"Democrats in Texas,for example, or Repuublicans in Claiforina. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+316ff4b19728,0B8629C697D5,"Inconclusion,Anybody should be able to vote like teenagers,and aldults because the Electoral College is a process,they consists of the selection of the electors,and at the most basic level,the electoral college is unfair to voters.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a97d2c47b078,0BAF08001514,"I think Policy 1 would be a good idea ""Allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class"" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3eeba149ad5e,0BAF08001514,Sense the rules changed and we are no longer allowed to go to the bathrooms we have to stay in class then we should be able to at least text and play games. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc727aedf959,0BAF08001514,it really does not change anything except for the fact that it would keep most of us quiet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b7e34ca1d160,0BAF08001514,Half of the school brings there phones into class anyway. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d0d8cdc15ff,0BAF08001514,"They text, go on face book, play games, some even talk on the phone. Most kids go to the bathroom to text and talk to people so I think that you should at least let people use there phones at floor. because that would probably stop most of them from texting during class if they can look forward to texting during floor and lunch time and other free times they have during school hours. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10b36c080512,0BAF08001514,"If something were to happen they could tell there parents what is going on or if they get in trouble they could text or call there parents to say ""pick me up at this time because i have to stay after"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85c95d5a33b1,0BAF08001514,This Is The Reason Why I Would Go With Policy 1. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f10b28a47d38,0BB0E957B6FE,I recommand you to keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ce9c17d5cf8,0BB0E957B6FE,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+15ecf0a6ead1,0BB0E957B6FE,The Electoral College process consists of selection of the electors ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+26480028940000,0BB0E957B6FE,"each canidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors . 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+12015d35c7b3,0BB0E957B6FE,"To begin with , i think the state senator should keep the Electoral College because it a fantastic college . ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8f302f14c746,0BB0E957B6FE,"Majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President .The District of Columbia Is Allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. The Electoral College is a process , not a place. The Electoral College is widely regared as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winter . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+236c8f942b57,0BB0E957B6FE,"The Electoral College process consists of selection of the electors , the meeting of the electors where they vote for presisdent and Vice president , and the counting of the electoral votes by congress . ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+54f56d2195bc,0BB0E957B6FE,The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday In November. Most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f3f38e19b07,0BB0E957B6FE,"Last but not least , Let me remind you that each candidate running for president in you state has his or her own group of electors ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+59601aa80ea1,0BB0E957B6FE,"There Usually selected by the candidates political party , but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. Your states certificates of Ascertainments are sent tot he Congress and the National Archives as part of the offcial records of the presidential election . After the presidential election , your governor prepares a ' Certificate of Ascertainment' listing all of the candidates who ranfor president in your state along with the names of their respective  electors . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f03458514aa5,0BC016A285DC,Hear are some of my thoughts on the change of school policy on raising the grade average on sports. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1802d31524ea,0BC016A285DC,Most students have a C GPA lower of higher. My opinion on this idea is good and bad. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+56e6f7153aa7,0BC016A285DC,One of the reasons that this is a good idea to me is because it will probably encourage kids to work harder on getting good grades in school so they can play the sport that they are interested in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffe0604fc9d6,0BC016A285DC,"one of the reasons why it is a bad idea is because if the GPA on sports is raised, some of the kids that may have lower grades in school, they might think that having good of grades like that might be not worth it to play a sport causing the numbers to possibly decrease. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee09566fec62,0BC016A285DC,"Over all i think this a bad idea, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+639c1f95857f,0BC016A285DC,"i think it would be better to leave the GPA for sports at a grade C average because a C grade average is not low but still good enough to the sport or sports that the student wants to play, it would be easier for all of the sport playing students and all of the ones in the future. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c3cf3dcf274,0C0C473FA794,I truthfully believe this is not created by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4d96b7495d07,0C0C473FA794,"Even if the artifact was created by aliens we have no proof of actually seeing them. NASA denies that there is not any other logical proof of aliens, but NASA's budget really wishes there was an ancient civilization. It would mean great publicity and further exploration into science. As a scientist learning about this you may believe anything within earshot. Whatever could seem logical, could not really be what is really right. Confusing as this argument sounds, I really believe that aliens never would have made this artifact. Could something like this happen? Do they really exsist? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69c986e30f37,0C0C473FA794,"Nature is different on mars, how is this effective? Mars has different climates and weather storms that we don't experience on earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+440b3f538d50,0C0C473FA794,"Maybe, the ""face"" is a weathered rock and when shadows cross over it it really looks like a face. Does that seem truthful enough to you? Or even believable? Sometimes when we look at clouds they can be different shapes as what we think they look like. To you, this is artifact that needs further examination. If we could excavate it from Mars we could further our studies on what truly made this rock really look like a face. How could this happen, you may ask? The cost of getting another spaceship to Mars and having a crew does cost alot of money, I understand. NASA made the last possible missions come true, would we be putting the people in that spaceship in danger? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6246f084bf44,0C0C473FA794,"Mars really isn't that safe, that may be why people dont life on Mars without a suit and oxygen tank. Because something bad could really happen up there, and we need contact with earth to tell whats going on. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3567415e9ae4,0C0C473FA794,"That may put people in danger sending the crew up there. We can only think and hope that the artifact was created by aliens. The face on Mars is an icon for magazines and movies like ""The Martian"" and books like ""The Lunar Chronicles"". A single dicovered thing can turn sellers into money-makers easliy. All these fanatsy in books and movies, really can make us believe what we believe. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5dbd2502c4f8,0C0C473FA794,Pictures say that shadows make it look like a face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a10b8112c60c,0C0C473FA794,"To me the artifact looks like a giant rock, with holes in it. When the shadows of clouds do come along it looks like a face. We may reallly never know who, what, or how this confusing landmark was made. The whole solar system moves around the sun, sometimes they said that they couldnt find Cydonia. Its stuck behind the cloud storms, but this face is really a natural landform on Mars. Now pictures can be photoshopped can't they? If this really was a face why does it look the way it does? From early pictures they turned out blurry and you cant really see the face. I still dont see the face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9d289075d91,0C0C473FA794,"Some say the camera doesnt lie, well in this case it may. If aliens were there making these faces wouldnt there be more? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e6d81279bb0,0C0C473FA794,"it would be a culture to them, or a ceremonial thing. We may never know. All these questions have no answer to them. What is really happening on Mars? Why were the artifacts made, but its really something we will never understand. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbf7dbe92c55,0C0C473FA794,"If aliens did make the artifact where are they? Wouldnt we see something about them or some weird signals coming from them? Aliens dont really exsist, as much as the subject wraps around our brains, it really leaves us clueless on what we know and what we dont know. Since we really have no proof, I believe that aliens did not make this artifact, found on Mars. I could be wrong to some people, but i believe my claim is true. There really may be a civilization on Mars if we could really think about it and further our studies. But for now i believe this artifact is really just a weathered rock on the face of Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a40156b8f56c,0C0E56A1FB05,The Electoral College is a great way to elect a upcoming President. The Electoral College was created by our founding fathers. The Electoral College has 538 electors. You would need a majority of 270 electoral votes is needed to elect a President. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d4d394ba3426,0C0E56A1FB05,"We should not abolish The Electoral College becaude it is a great way to elect our
+
+President. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+f5697c16c250,0C0E56A1FB05,"First, The Electoral College is the best way to elect your President. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1489740e2900,0C0E56A1FB05,There are some drawbacks like it is outdated and irrational ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5116f35adbd3,0C0E56A1FB05,but it has been working in the country since the founding farthers. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4a9e6b4adf49,0C0E56A1FB05,"The reason why we should not abolish The Electoral College is that every state counts as a vote. One example is that Florida has 29 electoral votes, but big states with less people has a lowerer electoral vote. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a6d69901b46,0C0E56A1FB05,"Second, ""The Electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+15f6504636f8,0C0E56A1FB05,said In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president. Another reason why we should keeep the Electoral College is that it doees the vote cast on how many people are in the state not how big the state is. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2551d2f2d05f,0C0E56A1FB05,"Third, The Electoral College has each canididate running for president in your stare has his or her own group of electors"" said In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1acab12850aa,0C0E56A1FB05,"In conclusion, we should not abolish The Electoral College because it is the best way to vote for our candidate. The popular vote may be good but The Electoral College is the best choose we have in America.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+438a4f0c50e1,0C1BFE5E9F69,Some people may not be able to make A' s and B' s in school so they try there best ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+09a1580b82b8,0C1BFE5E9F69,it wouldn't be right if the students had to make good grades to play sport ,Position,Adequate,,,
+48146717f63d,0C1BFE5E9F69,"people aren't always really smart, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a361c5c09a8e,0C1BFE5E9F69,"they cant focus during school cause of distractions, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f05e1a3a0007,0C1BFE5E9F69,people may be having home problems or something like that and that's stops there focus from doing any thing productive with there lives. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9545926b618e,0C1BFE5E9F69,"that throws off grades in school so i don't think it would be equally fair if you couldn't play sports with a ""C ""average ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67a3920b059f,0C1BFE5E9F69,there probably wouldn't be enough players to play any of these sports at these school related activities ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74eb125c11fe,0C1BFE5E9F69,"some schools get to play with ""D"" average students that's not really fair as I think of it all . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+adce6157ef65,0C1BFE5E9F69,"like fights and other things that not really cost for during the school hours people need to learn how to control there self, at school with people in the public it is crazy in this world now in days back then it seems that it was probably no burglary or nothing like that. But now it is crazy in the streets of certain places. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc12ceacc3ad,0C1BFE5E9F69,"they are probably stressing out and thinking of what is going on at there house ecspeacillay if they are taking care of some one or something like that which is making them worry alot at school which another way of distraction to other kids and it is also taking away of there good grades in order to play those sport at school . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bdff5f9119e9,0C1BFE5E9F69,"if they are going to try and make students make good grade just to play sports not all students can do as I say because making an A or B is hard for some of these students, and it will mess them up if they were hoping to go pro in some type of sport . So I don't really think that is a good idea to make it were you have to have a ""B"" average in order to play some type of sport its crazy I think so anyways. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+11d668703cde,0C1D8179D5F3,i believe that you should get rif of the electrical collage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a8ddec215971,0C1D8179D5F3,the votes are biased and with the citizens voteing you can get better results. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5a4b8a0696d,0C1D8179D5F3,"first of all,even though the electoral collage consists of 538 electors ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89e217672bd7,0C1D8179D5F3,i think it would be better if all of citizens from across the globe can help more ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ed0efc0bde73,0C1D8179D5F3,due to more people and more relibilty then with 570 people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+547a855b1cbc,0C1D8179D5F3,"secend of all,if ""the popular vote""was gone and was taken seriesly then we would have better quality presidents ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6fb391d65588,0C1D8179D5F3,"like al gore even though he was popular he still lost the presidency. according to bradford plumer over 60 precent of voters would perfer a direct election also,how are we sure to trust the electors anyway? is texians vote on john kerry they might not lisin and vote on whoever they want out of spite ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aca702df8bec,0C1D8179D5F3,also we don't want to repeat the 2000 fiasco agein and the system allows much worse ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+226258c33e59,0C1D8179D5F3,"and they occasionally refuse to vote for the party canidate. and disaster will happen is two slates of electors to congress like when it happend in hawaii in 1960 when richard nixion only wanted elector voters but luckly he did it ""without establishing a precedent"". and what would happen if theirs a tie in the electoral vote? then the electorals would be thrown to the house of represenitives and they vote on the president there. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+068b7ad5eb04,0C1D8179D5F3,"incluclosion,we should get rid of the electoral collage because it's unfair,outdated and irrational. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ee4106743697,0C2BEA6C812A,I feel as if we should have a say on who we vote for President...Am I right? But at the same time we do need a majority of votes from a Electoral College who knows a little bit more then us. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+293b93953e86,0C2BEA6C812A,That is why Im here to say that Election by popular vote for the President of the United States would be better then having a Electoral College that is most likely Segregationists vote for us. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+22dce0567ef5,0C2BEA6C812A,"It is said that if we would had popular votes for the President instead of Electoral College,we would most likely have a better chance of getting a President that would be the best at his country then to get someone that is just a favorite of a country of a state by segregationists ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c35d065de76,0C2BEA6C812A,"meaning someone that just like you from your race or skin color,but at the same time the Electoral College is established cause of our founding fathers as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote. A Electoral College is consist of 538 electors and 270 electoral votes are required to elect the President,we on the other hand,get a few people that we voted on for voting for the president and vice president,and sometimes that can be the wrong president we pick or get confused picking the wrong candidates. But I feel the people who support who we have as Presidents should be abled to have a say on what they think and feel on the President,cause after all,we need someone to look up to. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f49c14a9ff3e,0C2BEA6C812A,"Another way that I feel the popular vote should be the best thing then the Electoral College is that in Source 2:Pharagraph 14, it explains how the Electoral College is unfair,outdated,and irrational ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3dc6caaad5c8,0C2BEA6C812A,"its like even if we won our votes then basically the Electoral College won dued to The winner-take-all system in each state. I feel this is unfair cause its basically stating that the Electoral College vote is the vote that they will accept even though we are voting to,but at the same time they have more say and know how on what we dont know about the Presidents and the Vice Presidents,but having favored seperation based on race. Source 3:phargraph 23 explains that the Electoral College method of selecting the President may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b3fd94d5c3a,0C2BEA6C812A,I feel as if popular voters dont look into political preference then to just pick a vote and hope that their pick is going to be the President. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+afa29db0a3d8,0C2BEA6C812A,"The Electoral College gets into all the questions and discuss who would be the best, however, a popular vote would just be that the person is their favorite just like the Electoral College. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+966fc1ee5935,0C2BEA6C812A,"If I had a choice between keeping the Electoral College or a popular Vote, I would pick a popular vote cause the Electoral College is pretty crashed and it really fair. I say give people a chance and let them vote.  Picking a pedigree plurality of votes from the Electoral College then from the Popular votes isnt fair based on us. No voters vote swings a national election,and in spite of that,about one-half the eligible American population did vote in the election of 2012,as said in pharagraph 23. I think that Voting for the popular vote would be better then Electoral College cause it would be the states vote instead of just a majority of peoples vote that only want a president that is not validated for success for us. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6893fb82e4ae,0C2CD7E1B791,keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5b20b09c7295,0C2CD7E1B791,The electoral college is a easy way of picking the president the most popular canidate with most votes is the winner. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b3dd1562420,0C2CD7E1B791,Also each party picks a nominee and trust is very rarely betrayed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a54a404d0b52,0C2CD7E1B791,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dee3d82edcdc,0C2CD7E1B791,"The electoral college system is a fairly simple way of voting that most people understand replacing it with something else would just instill alot of mis understanding in people ,wich could possibly result in a huge decrease in the amount of people that vote ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3450a337080,0C2CD7E1B791,Also the negatives of the electoral college are not really a big deal that coud cause a fixing or a inbalenced vote towards one side over another ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+21486a95f428,0C2CD7E1B791,"In conclusion I think sticking with the electoral college is a wise decison because there isnt anything wrong with it ,why fix something that isnt broken?    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3a89f364b4d,0C95E489AC08,"I am in not favor of the
+
+Electoral College ",Position,Adequate,,,
+61ebb6c7c5f4,0C95E489AC08,"Electoral College is made so the political people have the say so
+
+NOT
+
+the people. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+005634150ba7,0C95E489AC08,"The last time I checked it was By the people, For the people. I believe that the American people have the right not a berucratt sitting on his butt all day doing
+
+Nothing other than voting with the Electoral Voting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2cb442339183,0C95E489AC08,Thanks to the Electoral College Mr. Barack Obama got a second term in office and now the country is suffering from it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5f7e1c530af,0C95E489AC08,"Even us students thanks to Mrs. Obama we are not having nice lunches like we had before the Obamas got elected. The Electoral College joined the anachronism club after President Obama join his first term in office. Also the Electoral College gave Obama plurality. There are 538 people in the Electoral College(according to ""
+
+What is The Electoral College? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+529655a082ce,0C95E489AC08,there are at least more than 4 million people maybe 5 million in the United States of America. There are more of American people than Democratics and Republicans in the Senate. So actullally we out number all of you slick polictions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+462fc9577df7,0C95E489AC08,Yeah sure Florida is one of the top 4 states that give out the major electoral votes but it is only a number 29 ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+00dacf4d6664,0C95E489AC08,"its not that big of a deal unless the people you have counting votes cannot count over 538, then ok those are some pretty stupid people you should send them back to school. My grandpa at age 70 can count much better than that. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+16d7ba78af93,0C95E489AC08,"Answer me this. Is America still for the People, or is it for the slick polictions with there Electoral College? Which one is it? Just face it the Electoral College is old school and for the polictions not for the people. Get Rid of the Electoral College and Let the actual living American people vote.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a2b2500c1ed9,0CA9AC7879C9,"We should forget about the system of electorial college to vote for a president. It just isn't fair, reason why is beacause you are electing people to vote for the person who is trying to be president of the U.S although that doesnt mean that you both are voting for the same person that's trying to be president of the U.S. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+75100244ef32,0CA9AC7879C9,The electorial college system is corrupted and needs to stop being used to elect a president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+811aedc1b7c0,0CA9AC7879C9,"To begin, In the source 2 they state the following ""60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e828207173c1,0CA9AC7879C9,Reasons why is because the electorial college is unfair it can make the person who had most of the votes lose because of the people who voted for the person to vote for a president choose the other runner up and make the person with the most votes actually lose. This is why people wish to have a direct election so they wont have to worry about their vote not going to the other runner up president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8cc27b0a011,0CA9AC7879C9,"Secondly, The reason why the electorial college is wrong is because we dont have our own voice; but the slate of electors do which can be pretty much anybody. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66cfdd3bafa4,0CA9AC7879C9,"For example in the article ""What's wrong with the electorial college"" they state (If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors that pledged to Kerry) these elctors can be anyone and still doesn't have to be voting for him though. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5d8a2667d3f,0CA9AC7879C9,"Although, If the people can rebalence the electorial college system then it can be somewhat a good thing. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1b4242cf87c0,0CA9AC7879C9,"I can see how it can be somewhat balenced already; stated in the first source ""the whole electorial college has a total of 538 electors. The president you wish to elect has to have a majority of 270 electorial votes in order to win."" That means they need to have 270 more votes than the other president too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c2be36449a86,0CA9AC7879C9,"unless people can find ways to limit the loosing president to come back with electoral votes, then yes this system should be banned. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ab0cba6eccc9,0CE521F8D172,I think that students should have the choice to do community service ,Position,Effective,,,
+4015c784be9c,0CE521F8D172,I think the only time a student should be forced to do community service is when their being punished. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7e38012b9f25,0CE521F8D172,Most students might have too much to do for community service ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ca3b44621454,0CE521F8D172,"If there too busy doing community service the students might not be able to take care of there more important responsibilities. Students might have homework or house chores to do. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc41e0bb29a3,0CE521F8D172,I think you should let the students that want to do community service do it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90c8c3229e01,0CE521F8D172,"If they're always doing community service, when will the students be able to have time to enjoy for themselves. Doing community service takes a lot of time out of a persons day. If there was a test a student had to take the next day after doing community service when schools over and if that student spent a lot of time to do that, then when that student got home, he would be restless and probably wouldn't have enough time to study for that test. I just don't think that community service is healthy for a lot of kids learning environments ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+55bc2b5c58f6,0CE521F8D172,"So, this concludes my theory on students doing community service. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66f4633765ab,0CE6E6BF8EA4,Community service offers an opportunity to kids and adults who feel they want to do something for the community. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+455fc8e3dc89,0CE6E6BF8EA4,"I being a person who very much appreciate the place we live in, have decided to write this letter to tell you why community service should be required for at least 10 hours every school year ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+919cb466d5a3,0CE6E6BF8EA4,"Of course some students wouldn't like that, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+2fc645d60bbf,0CE6E6BF8EA4,but it would be a way of teaching them to do good not only for themselves but also for others who do appreciate and want to feel good for what they do. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+87ad2948f39e,0CE6E6BF8EA4,"Knowing that no one wants to be in a dirty or bad community, community service helps build self-control as well as self confidence. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1346942fd287,0CE6E6BF8EA4,"Helping out seniors in homes is a great way to help others that after so long of hard working now need a way to know they did a great job in their life and that they're being appreciate. Doing some garden help might be a big mess but it's a great way to help the community out, even at a school. Another good way of helping a student is to have them help those in need, which helps them be thankful for what they have and to not give up on their goals. I am not only saying this for the good of others, I am also saying this with experience, not only from myself but other friends of mines that have changed from the help of doing community service for their school or for another requirement. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18ba60f8039c,0CE6E6BF8EA4,I being a helpful person to the community and others who needs the help feel that community service is a pay-off to knowing your helpful. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+16691d331f4c,0CE6E6BF8EA4,"I believe that community service should be required because no doubt that every teacher wants a self-controlled person in their class, I am not saying that every person will be made to be caring or controlled, but they will know that doing those things do pay off when you look back and think at them. Some studies have also showed that helping out does build a self-made person with respect for themselves and others. This will also make the school look good with all the students who do help to create the community better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+93c63617c56f,0CE6E6BF8EA4,I am hoping you think about my discussion and see every way that benefits the school to be better then it is. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b35015e761cd,0CFDDC1CF75A,I think they should not let them to bring cell phones during school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5e12970383e5,0CFDDC1CF75A,because they will be intertain. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bb7bc81349f9,0CFDDC1CF75A,And they will text every time when the teacher is not looking ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+edf35965af12,0CFDDC1CF75A,and when ask them a problem they say oh I wasn't paying attension. Or they sometime will say could you repeat it again. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f94cf418716,0CFDDC1CF75A,Sometime they are texting to there friend or boyfriend what they are doing instead on focusing on there studying or on there future . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffa0f1907a98,0CFDDC1CF75A,And sometime when they are passing the street of school a car come an have an accented just buy texting and not focusing if a car is coming. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46d5180dff67,0CFDDC1CF75A,They don't bother to come to school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bda249d39ba,0CFDDC1CF75A,because her friend told her to not go to class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da6751ab0413,0CFDDC1CF75A,they talk about people and spreads it around. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2796c1e3346,0CFDDC1CF75A,they don't care about school but only texting to her friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cec934b17dfd,0CFDDC1CF75A,And they have low grades buy talking to her friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4458a5594b5,0CFDDC1CF75A,And they are just talking and talking. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0eb2812d7f75,0D18BDF22C59,I believe that doing community service is a great thing. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+79d3b7cd2fa1,0D18BDF22C59,"The world needs our help, and would do greatly with the support. Community service is a great way to keep the world and people healthy and happy. I personally think that community services are a great way to get everyone together to do positive things that can make a great benefit towards everything and everyone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7df9e32a28f1,0D18BDF22C59,There are many community service projects that we could start doing. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1879ec5a4004,0D18BDF22C59,"We could clean the communities from all the trash and glass on the earth, we could volunteer at homeless shelters and nursing homes, we could paint houses and help civilians with simple tasks like walking their dogs, raking their leaves, mowing their lawns, simple little things like that. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b4c1b1bc8f25,0D18BDF22C59,Of coarse we're going to need help persuading people to do these little things. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b5303274e3a8,0D18BDF22C59,"We could inform them about the benefits of having a healthy world and about the things that are happening right now because of the careless acts of others. Telling people about these things will help them get an understanding of how bad things are right now and to do simple, but hard-working things can cause a great change to the world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f5ab8ca41670,0D18BDF22C59,I understand that some people think that community service is a waste of time. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+cadc542b8ef3,0D18BDF22C59,We need to help them understand that the only way things are going to change are by the acts of others. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+98c8de9ef5a8,0D18BDF22C59,"We wouldn't have a lot of things if it weren't for the kind act of other people. For example, what people are doing in Haiti is a kind act of helping. The water wells that are being built there are helping the Haitians so they can have clean drinking water and cleaning water. I am sure that the Haitians are very thankful that there are people in the world that care. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2affa161a39f,0D18BDF22C59,I hope we can get plenty of support out of this cause and help things become a little better than they are now. Please help me get the support of others and to help me take this writing into action. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+56dd3eab38a4,0D6199F762DC,"To keep the Electoral College or to change the election by popular vote is the question many people are facing today. There are many different reason why we should keep, and same for as why we should change it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+11a086753397,0D6199F762DC,I believe we should change the election from the Electoral College to popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4faadc791808,0D6199F762DC,"because, with the Electoral College people are voting for a slate of electors not an actual presidential canidate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d120d9f0312c,0D6199F762DC,it is unfair for our American people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38e4f2d2e0c1,0D6199F762DC,and most people prefer the popualr vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a3284ee043c,0D6199F762DC,By voting for a presidential canidate you are actually voting for a slate of electors who vote for the presidental canidate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ecf13bf817d,0D6199F762DC,"This means that our votes don't really count for much. It also means that even though we voted for someone the slate could have voted for someone completely different. Also we the people have no idea who the electors are. Who even picks them? The electors that are chosen depends on the state, sometimes it's the state conventions, sometimes the states party's central committee, and sometimes it can be the presidential canidate himself. Some voters didnt even see campaigne ads, so how did they chose their presidential caidate? They didn't, the Electoral College did. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a812a6d3650,0D6199F762DC,"America is suppose to be a free state, that is fair, but are we really? The Electoral College is one thing I can point out as unfair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69cde158e329,0D6199F762DC,"Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system, that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate, but what if the people didn't want that candiate? Why should he get our way of speaking to the government? How are we even sure that he didn't elect himself? Also canidates don't spend time in the states they know they will have a chance of winning because of biasim. They mainly focus on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00062190afe4,0D6199F762DC,"In reality we all want our way, or our voice and or actions to make an impact, with the Electoral College that's not happening, which is making the people of our country unhapy with the government, which means we all can't get along ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+638020e7f84e,0D6199F762DC,"Most people prefer elections to be based on popular vote so they know they get what they want, so they know they're actually making an impact. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f1763cc17d22,0D6199F762DC,"With this being said, I believe I have made my impact on your thoughts of the question, "" to keep the Electoral College, or change election to popular vote?"". The Electoral College has both it's upsides and it's downside, but I believe it has more flaws than perfections. Yes, it has been around for many decades and is apart of our histroy, maybe it worked then, but it's not working now. And we need to make a change before things get worse. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c0ce0093f6b5,0DD32C6E4E62,The electoral college is one of the most heavily criticized institutions in the American government system. It has been considered outdated and anti-democratic. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+08d7d0df87fc,0DD32C6E4E62,"However, without it, the balance of power in America would be skewed to an unacceptable degree. States with large populations would be disproportionately empowered, without the electoral college. This leaves the smaller states' existence to be controlled by the larger states, to the dismay of the American economy and people. ",Position,Effective,,,
+150412198e3f,0DD32C6E4E62,"As it stands, most states vote in a way that presents a united front of electors to the electoral college. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a954e2c644f9,0DD32C6E4E62,"If just over half of the Californian voters vote for one candidate that they think would represent their interests, the map in source 3 shows that all 55 electors will present their votes to the college. It is better for California to be represented in this way so that the Californian economy would not be adversely effected by their minority voters. That sort of united front is beneficial to every state in the union, for the same reason. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a987e1eac3ba,0DD32C6E4E62,"The argument that the electoral college discourages voters of the minority party to vote is a valid criticism, but it is a problem that can be solved without the loss of the electoral college ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+791db864e194,0DD32C6E4E62,Compulsory voting would be far more effective if voter turnout is an issue. People who would not have voted otherwise would still likely vote for the candidate they supported if voting was made mandatory. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+54f7814e241a,0DD32C6E4E62,"In source 2, Bradford Plumer expressed dissatisfaction with the way political campaigns involving the electoral college focus on swing states rather than allowing equal debate in all states, but that does not make for a less desirable outcome. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fc6d837b90f7,0DD32C6E4E62,"Dissolving the electoral college would make swing states irrelevant to presidential elections, as it'd be impossible to win votes in those states by any decent margin. Instead, campaigns would focus on the areas in which they already have an agreeable population, as to encourage them to vote, and get the most voters possible, using their resources. Trying to win states, rather than population, allows for voters to be more informed. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+229e7d3fc837,0DD32C6E4E62,"The electoral college might not be the best potential method for presidential elections. It is, however, far more desirable for such a large country than popular vote. Popular vote would lead to neglecting many areas of the economy that are important, but do not have a presence in states with large populations. It would make elections more one sided for each state at the same time. The problems the opponents say abolishing it would fix, would be fixed without it, but doing so would create far more problems than it solved. It is also easy enough to fix the same problems without abolishing the electoral college. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c41fcd58e7a6,0E01BA28D3D9,one reason i think that the face is just natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+55f39291c08c,0E01BA28D3D9,"is because it says that viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship. viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b3cdad01851,0E01BA28D3D9,"scientists figured it was just another martain mesa, common enought around cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like and egyptaian pharaoh. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+94139e66b6af,0E01BA28D3D9,"In the article it says that The ""Face on Mars"" has become a pop icon. The face icon statted in a hollywood film appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Most people belive that face was an alien artifact, photographing cydonia became a priority for NASA when mars global surveyor (MGS)arrived in red planet sept. 1997. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe9562ff45f9,0E01BA28D3D9,The face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72eaed2a62e0,0E01BA28D3D9,So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks you could see what they were!    ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+153e4c61cb04,0E0618CA73CD,"Good day state senator in this letter I would like to talk to you about changing the Electoral College to a popular vote. Even though the Electoral College is a good way of selecting a president. This meathot has his flaws, under the electoral college system the people that vote are not voating for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+64330ebd6bb3,0E0618CA73CD,"I think that the people that vote shude vote directly for the candidate they have chousen. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+41cf6068d7c8,0E0618CA73CD,This makes more sense that voting for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledge to the candidate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d22ad35deab,0E0618CA73CD,I think at the most basic level the electoral college is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba2ac39a6b32,0E0618CA73CD,"Since the voter are not voting directly for their candidate of choise, I personaly dont think this is the best way to go. The popula elections provide a better way of voting for president. Since it means that the people that vote a voating directly to the candidarte and not the electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6de93cc687b7,0E0618CA73CD,The popular elections is a safer an more fair way to vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3953c2d370f5,0E0618CA73CD,"By thid we could evate the disaster factor, for example the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century and the system allows for much worse. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e135bbf036f,0E0FF9B702E0,There are a lot of things that develop and hold a Electoral College together. There are also a lot of down falls to the Electoral College. Every state has 1 House of Representative plus 2 of your Senators in the Electoral College. There are a total of 538 people but 270 of them is the majority vote that wins. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4224cec609cb,0E0FF9B702E0,There are a total of 5 reasons why we have to keep this method to choosing the president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f1d4858c387d,0E0FF9B702E0,"The 5 ways are Certainty of outcome,Everyone's President,Swing States,Big States and Avoid Run-Off Elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c55d299546af,0E0FF9B702E0,The main reason we have a Electoral College is so they have a right way to choose a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a95c42b8b72b,0E0FF9B702E0,The main reason for this is so that we dont leave our electing in the hands of foriegn people/immiagrants. The is what the president needs to get elected in the electoral college. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6d680013cc2c,0E0FF9B702E0,"There are still a lot of down falls to this method of the electoral college though. One of these issues is ""at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voter"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+df9f36c08010,0E0FF9B702E0,"This means ""winner takes all"" which is they only focus on the bigger states and not the smaller ones because the bigger states have bigger population which means they have more in the electoral college ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b48176afad4,0E0FF9B702E0,Another issue with this method is that the person thats running for president might get the popularity vote but still not win. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a2801d9b1236,0E0FF9B702E0,"See everyone that votes isnt really voting directly for the president, the people who really count is the electoral college. In order to win the vote you have to convice the electoral college and thats not always easy. So remember just because you won popular vote doesnt mean you won the majority of the electoral vote. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf13da1cab8f,0E0FF9B702E0,There are 5 reasons why we keep this method of electing the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00f637b87312,0E0FF9B702E0,"The first reason is Certainty of Outcome. This means ""it's less likley than a dispute over the popular vote."" Which really means the candidates share to the other people in the Electoral college there share of the popular vote and thats how they vote. The second reason is Everyone's President. This is basically shows that ""the Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal."" This means that no region such as south,northwest,etc. has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The third resone to keeping these methods is Swing States. This tells me that its the ""winner takes all method."" The fourth method why we should keep these methods is the Big States. This explains that ""the Electoral College restores some of the wieght in the political balance."" this means that the bigger states get a big advantage in the electoral because the people that get elected into office there is based off of population so they have an advantage. THe bigger states get more attention from the candates then the smaller states do. The final reason why we should keep this method of voting is Avoid Run-Off Elections. This means ""the Electoral College aviods the problem of Elections in which no candidates recieves a majority of the votes cast"". This means no pressure for candidates when they win majority of the votes cast. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c5d2f056bfdb,0E0FF9B702E0,There are many ways to develop and to hold the Electoral College together. There are many ways that it falls apart and has it flaws but its the best way for our econany to vote for president. If you think about it if we just did popularity vote that would be like leading our hands into a world of immigrates who know a very little. There a lot of rules for our Electoral process buyt its the best way and the only way we have to becoming a better place. Dont forget to look at the 5 reasons we keep this the way it is. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e3e7dc6aa984,0E550CD08832,"The electoral college in many peoples eyes is a good thing but, there is a majority of other people who would much rather have a more direct vote because all though one president got the popular vote among the voters, the electoral votes count differently. One direct vote could count for ten votes or it could count for two votes and most people would rather have their vote count as just their vote. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+665d080ea986,0E550CD08832,Electoral votes in a lot of peoples minds is just unfair all around. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a4f07ed70d1,0E550CD08832,"One president could be the favorite among the voters but the electors the president has to back him up with electoral votes could maybe not be as big as another presidents electors and its pretty much, in many peoples eyes, giving the least popular among the people president an easier way to become president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab2549ab7533,0E550CD08832,Adults that vote like knowing that their vote really counts for the person theyre voting for. That is why people would much rather have a direct way of voting than the electoral college ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d7fb771ae5c,0E550CD08832,"which is taking one vote from one person, and say there are thirty electors in that one slab for the person you voted for, and giving that person thirty votes for the person they want elected. People find this way of voting unfair because they dont like the fact that the person they voted for could get the most popular votes, but the number of electors there are for the person is not very many, so their votes count as less than others do. Many feel that they are being deprived of their right to vote because one person could be voting but they get 10 votes while another peson could be votin and only get 6 and its not equal for all people. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+152cb13ae827,0E550CD08832,"People who vote for a president that gets the most popular votes, and they dont win the election, can start big disputes among the way the elections are carried out. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+39cf38dc496a,0E550CD08832,"When a president wins only the electoral votes and not the popular vote, many dont feel like they are actually their president. Most people would prefer direct voting because it actaully makes everybodys votes count equally and everybody has equality. Winning electoral votes doesnt show that you won because the majority of people wanted you to win, it shows you have many supporters to give you more votes through the electoral college ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30119ce384e7,0E550CD08832,Direct voting would be a better way to vote so that everybody felt like their votes really counted towards who they voted for and that they arent getting cheated because one president has more electors supporting them. The electoral college is not based on equality because everybodys votes count differently due to supporters or electors who are pretty much the ones getting the votes. fixing the way people vote and how they vote can change the way some people feel towards the preident no matter who they are. Let the people vote for who they want and not the electors because it would make more people more open to vote than there are now.      ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+316d15f63aa8,0EA4C1D85D69,"In this essay I am going to talk about NASA discussing the Face with, someone who thinks it was created by aliens and I am suppose to convince that is wasn't a alien who, made the Face. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+913ff0cb0dc5,0EA4C1D85D69,"Why don't I believe that wasn't a alien because it could have been a rock that landed and it shaped the Mars into a face in 2001. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+3971c94e98eb,0EA4C1D85D69,"So why I don't think aliens made it beacuse aliens aren't real, and they would have did something different probably if they were real. In this essay I don't think it was by aliens because it says "" The caption noted a ""huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nise, and a mouth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebf36cdb9e22,0EA4C1D85D69,I don't think aliens made this because of the pictures and things. They would have showed up and given us a sign that they were there and there are satellites up that takes pictures of all the things and planets. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d25948a5c7a6,0EA4C1D85D69,"For my conclusion I think aliens did not make the Face because of many reasons and because, of the technology today we could have picked up a signal or something because, of the satellites and all of the technology we have today.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8ae0dc965236,0EAF5E712F0D,I think we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ec3bf7d9567,0EAF5E712F0D,For one reason is its in our Constitution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da86eb7c3adb,0EAF5E712F0D,You cant just go back and erase it off the Constitution ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+341adb2b2c04,0EAF5E712F0D,The other thing is you have to be an qualified citizen. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fcd7269b59f7,0EAF5E712F0D,"Sorry but i dont want a comenest to vote for our president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+15fe3d54d5a7,0EAF5E712F0D,The Electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportonment  of the senate decreed in the constitution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a81bda12c3ab,0EAF5E712F0D,"So your getting back some of what you put in, it is a win win situation ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d89c42631639,0EAF5E712F0D,If you keep the Electoral college you get certainty of out come ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad2b079f48a0,0EAF5E712F0D,A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it happend in 2000. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96d28da21c54,0EAF5E712F0D,The electoral college requries a presidential candidate to have a transregional appeal ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b27afac0b8e7,0EAF5E712F0D,No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03fdb584ad9c,0EAF5E712F0D,The electoral college can be argued that its method of selecting the president my turn off voters for a candidate who has no hope of carring there state. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fce978ce774d,0EAF5E712F0D,you can also avoid run off elections. The Electoral college avoids the oroblems of and election ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c59a08b6c3e8,0EAF5E712F0D,"Like when Nixion and Clinton both had 43 percent plurality of popular votes, while winning a majority in Electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99e097451bba,0EAF5E712F0D,This is my reasons why i would keep the Electoral college ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c1aa2f5da191,0ED7102ED5B3,Why should we keep the Electoral College? Because its what we've done from the start. Sometimes its fine just to keep things the same ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0b64edcc4ddb,0ED7102ED5B3,There is nothing wrong with change but I  beleive that this is the right choice. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e2c3650c899,0ED7102ED5B3,"If we demolish the Electroal College then voting really wouldn't be fair. Because some states have more people than others. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd56e47df66d,0ED7102ED5B3,I dont think we really need to change this rule. Because sometimes its best to keep things the same ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c07b53f71e92,0ED7102ED5B3,Its been going on for about 200 years. There hasn't been too many things that have gone wrong with it. Yes there has been troubles in the past. But were all human no matter what we do we can't be perfect. So we will just have to learn from our mistakes an approve on them. We have to belive we have the right people for the job and hope they will make sure things run smoothly for electing a president or any other official we use it for. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2933ab2ea69b,0ED7102ED5B3,If we get rid of the Electoral College then the voting for office wouldnt be fair. Some states are a lot bigger than others. So once its gone then the bigger states would have more effect on the votes than the smaller ones ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b8b501fc4e62,0ED7102ED5B3,"Example: if we do get a new way to vote and its off popular vote then what if New York has 40,000,000 people and Nevada has only 10,000,000 people. New Yorks votes would have a more effect than Nevadas. This may lead to long debates over the voting arrangement because the smaller states would be mad that they wouldn't get as much of a fair vote. Just like how it was when the founding fathers made this arrangement. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+736dbdb01167,0ED7102ED5B3,These are my reasons I think that keeping the Electoral College is a better than having just popular vote.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b4b8a44290a9,0EF91AC5D457,I wanted to adress the positivity in keeping the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ac4fcc2fa8a,0EF91AC5D457,The Electoral College has a small chance of winning with a Electoral College vote than a popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f0bd9f66316,0EF91AC5D457,Every state is important because everyone's a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b965a5b5e573,0EF91AC5D457,there are swing states which is a winner-takes-all method. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3788179fd7a5,0EF91AC5D457,Although in 2000 the Electoral College vote happened ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3ee2c9e61ff4,0EF91AC5D457,it is very unlikely to occur. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7f4770f6a9dc,0EF91AC5D457,Reason is that the Electoral College exceeds the share of the popular vote. Even a slight chance of a state plurality could cause a landslide electoral-vote-victory. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2aed3fe9d885,0EF91AC5D457,In the Electoral College no region has enough Electoral votes to elect a president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e84ea310f265,0EF91AC5D457,"This means that a region needs to influence another to have atleast a elected president. For example, Romney was a solid regional(South) which means he focused in one region not the others, concluding his lost. So, it was very likely that Romney would not win because of his appeal to one region. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+063d424a9736,0EF91AC5D457,"This was seen in 2012's election. The ost thoughtful voteers would have to decide the election, making Electoral College very fair.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86db80fa8104,0EFDADD0CCD9,it is unfair to ask that students participating in sports should have a B average. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38ffed940673,0EFDADD0CCD9,"Sports and other after school activities take a lot of time and commitment, and leave participants with much less time to study. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+787793166465,0EFDADD0CCD9,"Asking participants to keep up a B average would cause a lot of stress on the students. Many students who do not partake in sports have difficulty keeping grades high, and sports require after school practices and games. This leaves team members with even less time to do their homework and study. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2cc43308696,0EFDADD0CCD9,"Also, a B average is a 3.0 GPA, which is nearly honor roll! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d98ab6938945,0EFDADD0CCD9,"A 3.0 GPA is something teenagers should aspire towards and work for, but not be required to achieve. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fddbadb4cbdc,0EFDADD0CCD9,Every student has his or her talents. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+72a04b882348,0EFDADD0CCD9,"Some excel at schoolwork, but others are outstanding in other fields, such as basketball, volleyball, or singing. Forcing students to keep their grades at such a high standard would cause late nights for many participants, who struggle to finish their homework daily. It means extra hours of studying and homework. It can be especially stressful on students high-level courses, such as Honors English and Social Studies or geometry. These students work hard enough in such classes and their efforts should be applauded, not looked down upon. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+056576f51219,0EFDADD0CCD9,"A C average, while maybe not something to post on your fridge at home, still requires plenty of effort. Maintaining a C average is a reasonable standard, but keeping a B average is unattainable for some students and should not be required. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+35b3cb786615,0F6250B6D784,The Electoral College that was established by the founding fathers in the Contitution is important to all of us. Every candidate that is running for President in each state has its own group of electors that the political party of the candidate chose ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+efb5098b2907,0F6250B6D784,"I am however, not in favor of keeping the Electoral College but to change it to be an election by popular vote for the president of the United States ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5ace7ac4bb16,0F6250B6D784,the reason being that it is unfair to the voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+289d8278cb05,0F6250B6D784,and outdated. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+286e318e0ed2,0F6250B6D784,The Electoral College is unfair to it's voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2a4467a4c58,0F6250B6D784,"If the candidate has more electoral votes than popular votes then they have a higher chance of winning. ""Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prewfer a direct election to the kind we have now"" (Plumer, Paragraph 9). The president is the leader of the United States and if most of our country votes on a candidate they think suites the best but the other candidate wins, that would make many voters dissapointed ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a878ef718069,0F6250B6D784,"""Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning"" (Plumer, Paragraph 13). Every vote counts, and the candidate that gets the most popular votes deserves the win. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa4eb9807314,0F6250B6D784,Since our founding fathers established the Electoral College it shows that it is outdated. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cfa2d2c8186,0F6250B6D784,"""The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" (Plumer, Paragraph 14). This is the twenty-first century, and we need to make our elections more modernized to where every voter is happy. A voter should not vote for an elector and hope that the candidate wins but be able to vote for the candidate itself. Even though there are many people against the Electoral College, it still has its defenders. ""This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency"" (Plumer, Paragraph 9). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b181c416cec,0F6250B6D784,"As there are people who believe that whatever our founding fathers established we need to keep our tradition going and not change a single thing, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4193f46f2a9e,0F6250B6D784,but maybe it's time for a change. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8a8d1326e1f9,0F6250B6D784,"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than poeple who thing that single vote may decide an election"" (Posner, Paragraph 23). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d08c29ecc65,0F6250B6D784,"""It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college"" (Plumer, Paragraph 14)! The voters think the Electoral College is unfair and outdated. People vote for a candidate but the outcome is not what they were expecting. The candidates that get the most popular votes deserve to win! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bf3aa20938b4,0F7934223515,"Community service can be a big way to help others. You usually need to do community service when you are either getting your confirmation done, or if you are in an honor society. Some people like to do community service for the joy of it though. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+009526a6071d,0F7934223515,"In my opinion, all students should perform community service. ",Position,Effective,,,
+74a39aec56bb,0F7934223515,Helping the community can make you feel good about yourself ,Claim,Effective,,,
+96f4f24f34c8,0F7934223515,and it is also very helpful to the environment around you. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3973812c437f,0F7934223515,"It does take time away from you, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fd6c10af945e,0F7934223515,but that time is used to help others ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9e9276ec8caa,0F7934223515,"If you just stay home all day on the computer or watching television, community service would be something to take your mind off of doing that. Or also, if you are constantly bored, community service cold even be a way of entertainment for yourself. Community service is a way to get out of your laziness and do something. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cafe064a3d9d,0F7934223515,There are a lot of people out there who need help with your community service. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+aba4ea8a36e7,0F7934223515,"Some children for example need tutoring in certain subjects that you may be able to help with. Another example is cleaning up litter in your local park or just on the streets outside your house. Elderly people can get lonely sometimes and a great way of community service would be to write them letters for the holidays and bring them happiness. If you are interested in arts and crafts you can get together with friends and make artwork for sick children in hospitals. Other people love snow. If you're one of those people who love the snow, you can shovel your neighbors driveways next time it snows. The thing is that if they offer you money, you cannot accept it, you must kindly say no or then it would not be community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a8fa83cd9fda,0F7934223515,"For the kids that do not participate in community service, well why don't they? It is a fantastic way to help others and there is no reason why not to do it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+105eee9d33ee,0FADC137B8B7,"I feel a need to adress that changing election by popular vote for the president of the United States over keeping electoral votes is, in my opinion, better for the people because it brings the U.S's people together in many ways. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c851e8fc2adc,0FADC137B8B7,"The people of the U.S deserve to make great decisions like these, on account of the fact that us, the people, make most of what we have in America today, and though we work hard and may have fights sometimes, we still make choices together,voting being one of them, and this unifies us even more. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+35253ce40edc,0FADC137B8B7,"Allowing this will bring a sense of unification 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c97fec44374b,0FADC137B8B7,". We already consider doing selfless acts just to make peace. Example: Our taxes pay doctors', polices', etc. salaries. We at least deserve to decide who enforces laws. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0510964e89c0,0FADC137B8B7,"Another thing, to begin this reasoning let this question be asked: What is the government doing right now, this very moment? Who really knows, for sure? Not us. The people of the U.S really haven't an honest clue what's really going on behind the government, so it wouldn't be too wise for us to entrust the government into completely making every decision, decisions in which we could perfectly make ourselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d2ae4904405,0FADC137B8B7,"So it not only gives us, the people, a sense of unification, it also gives a sense of direction so that we feel that we are not being blindly controlled by the government. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb43706ad876,0FADC137B8B7,"To commence the third reasoning let another question be asked: First, say for example that you work a double-shift, full-time, day and night just to keep food on your childrens' and wifes' plate, clothes on their backs, and a roof over their heads. When the bills roll in, your paycheck isn't won't arrive for weeks and you still haven't enough to pay, so you may have to work overtime if possible or pick up another job. No one gets rich off the government clearly, and yet we work so hard to just make it. Now here's the question: Doesn't it all feel worth it when the paycheck come in? Okay now for the deeper question: What is the sense or feeling you specifically get when you see you happy families' faces? Now for the point: Our work pays off. We work for the government (at least most of us does) together, whether to put bread on the table or otherwise. Now wouldnt it give us that sense of freedom that us hard workers get to make great decisions like these? It would. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8749590c1170,0FADC137B8B7,"All of these things bring us together more than we might even think, whether its families, friends, or just us as a nation. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f6174ce77b61,0FADC137B8B7,"To conclude all of the reasonings of arguing to change election to popular vote for the president of the U.S which are the sensation of unification, direction, and freedom, I'd be obliged to state that this is just one thing that finally unifies and brings the U.S's people together. Those three senses that this gives us is a seemingly small, yet great difference. And even though most don't realize it, it's definitely there.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f6bee86560dc,0FBD2FFA1DDF,"Ever wonder what is a "" Electoral College? Like what is that suppose to mean?, A internet campus, Tech class, or etc. Well its not actually A Electoral college is made for up coming presidents. That differrnt selections of people go and meet the president and vice presdent. The congress. The College consits up to 238 votes and only 270 on select for the presidecny.
+
+The president electron is held evey four yeas an the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. When you are about to select a presdint you vote for your candidan ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e21b0ec2b9c8,0FBD2FFA1DDF,"Two guys named Rich, Jummy carter, Chamber of Commerce and AFL-CIO and they are not alone according to Gallup poll in 2000, after Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Under the electoral college system voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors. The single best argument agianst the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The election would be thrown to the house or Representatives, where state delegations vote to the presdient. Because each state casts only one vote to give th voters vote to the president and another for the congress,
+
+The House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the wall of the people, And if an electoral tie seems unlikely. A the base level the electoral colloege is unfair to voters. Because of the winner takes it all system in each state , candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chances at win at these king of states for the president. They focuse only on the the tight races in the ""swing"" states. There many things in the Electoral College that many people on they outside don't know what the Congress or the up running presidents are struggling it looks easy on the inside bu on the ouside wow they have a lot to work on.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44dfd5206d7b,0FC4B7E09462,The state senetor should keep the electoral college because of the voting previlages. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c20c5a3eeaa3,0FC4B7E09462,"voting is held every tuesday of November. The elector college consist of 538 electors. A majority of 270 elector vots is required to elect from the president. Your states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressianl delegaton oe for each member in the house of Respresentives plus two for your Senators. The electoral Collge pricees consiste of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+777ed7e81b0d,0FC4B7E09462,"Futhermore, most states have a winner take it all system that awards all electort to the wiining the election. your states certification ascertainment also delclares the winning presidincial in your states adn shows which electors will respensint your state at the metting of the election in december. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8e1f284a9286,0FC4B7E09462,"To wrap everything up, the single best arguement agains tht eelectoral college is what we might call a disaster factor. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+988fb0ed2c1e,0FC4B7E09462,"The american people should conside themselves lucky that the 200 fiasco was the biggest election cris in the sententuries . Back in 1960, segregations in the Lousiana Legistature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8bf67e3835cb,0FC4B7E09462,"Finally,  its offical the elecoral college is unfair outdated adnd irrtional the agurements are against judgement. they need to keep electorial college. There are five ereaosn for retainign the electoral college desoite the lack of democratic pedigree, certanty of outcome, everyones presindent ], swing states, big states, avoid run off elections. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9b8e0d4b1905,0FC97658A027,"To begin with, I think this world is here to be on and do anything we want too.
+
+But I think that our community is important to us because its a place to have fun with friends and family.
+
+But its full of different kinds of both good and bad stuffs. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+41b2c1743527,0FC97658A027,"I think every student in schools should Perform in community service. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+91e320a96e36,0FC97658A027,"Not only student parents can also volunteer if they want too.
+
+We can find a way for students to participate to perform community service, like do a party or have fun after participating ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfc569c0e2af,0FC97658A027,But some might say it takes up their planning time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7ea6901d029d,0FC97658A027,but I think if everyone participates it wouldn't be so hard. We could also find a way for them like do it twice a day or schedule a time so they can do they can do what they need to do. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+edab81ae542d,0FC97658A027,"I think if we take care of the community other place might do it too.
+
+This could change the community and the whole wide world.
+
+I hope everyone perform community service. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e9700d4d6c3,0FF049B01070,some students have a c grade average and are on many of the sports hear at school some work very hard for that c because school is guest to hard for them. i bet if it was there choice they would have a A or a B. But not everyone has the same brain so school will be difficult for some student than others. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+023ca3f9e6df,0FF049B01070,But me personally if i was the principal i would let any chilod play with a C or higher average because god made us all different and were not all as smart as our classmates. ,Position,Effective,,,
+77c49045b6e8,0FF049B01070,some parts of school are harder than other ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+adec6ee7910b,0FF049B01070,for example algebra is a heck of alought harder than hope or technology. So in my perspective of this hole thing is you are takeing it way to far if you only let kids play on teams hear at SCHOOL_NAME it would be like totally deleting the basketball team because most of them have barley the grade they need to pass ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f847a7af9f5,0FF049B01070,Cutting back on sports and raising the grade point average is causeing obesity in teens all across America ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0244b38e4e0,0FF049B01070,would you really want to be hated by over half the schools population. HINT HINT i sure wouldn't want to be hated by over half the schools population !!! ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2571a6113b9d,0FF049B01070,"if that's your choice and you rely wanna be the worst principle ever than that's fine by me because like i said its not my decision to be the most hated principle in the hole universe and it doesn't affect me what so ever because my lowest grade is a B
+
+and im happy at that besides the kids on the team can guest go play rec or come to my house i gotta basket ball hoop. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b9bfcf91e260,10266FD6FA36,I agree we should clean up the entry school in end up clean like a whistle ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e5590c6d4a42,10266FD6FA36,"The principal should lets take some breaks once for a while. When school is over we should stay at school until 5:00 p. m. therefore cleaning up the liter and stuff off the ground and throw it away in the trash can. We should have a break at 3: 50 to 4:15 p. m. that gives us plenty of time for a break.
+
+But, let some people to go home so they can watch some of their favorite shows and play their video games. Once for a while they will come back help us because they did all their chores and their's nothing on TV. I will go home because I have to do chores and feed my animals. Plus sometimes I might have a bad day and want to get away from people. In a few minutes I would get over with it come back to school to make it better.
+
+I don't want anybody to come to this school and say "" This school doesn't look right because all this litter and trash all around the campus "", I would get up change the school picking up piece by piece unit it the cleanest school in Jefferson Davis County. We also need to clean the walls , decorated the school parking lots and cafeteria. We should build a new break room full with snack bars, soda machines, and rooms for people so they can talk on break. It would be good if you give us a break between Ist and 2nd. We could reorganize the gym because a lot people are trash behind after the game is over. We could put a trash can on the stands so the when the people leave out the gym it would be a little clean. Sometimes we could recycle bottles so we can use it over and over again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2857be02476,109DCAEA47FD,"The Electoral College is a great process that was created by the founding fathers in the Constitution.""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compronise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" The electoral college consistw of the electors the meeting of the electors of the voting for president and vice president. The electoral college process consists of 538 electors. When you run for president you have to get majority of the 270 electoral votes its required. Every candidate running for president has there own group of electors.""Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors."" The electors are chosen by the candidate's political party.
+
+When the presidential election is over your governor prepares a certificate of ascertainmentits listing all of the candidates who had ran for president in your state. The certicate also says the winning presidential canddidate in your state.""After the presidential election,your governor prepares a ""certificate of ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.""The states certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4fc866efd944,109DCAEA47FD,The electoral college should be keeping the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d19617ea8213,109DCAEA47FD,its a very important process of how we choose the president. If we just put our say in the votes some people might feellike htey amde the wrong choose in the voting ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13ffc24937c8,109DCAEA47FD,"And if we just let congress picl our president because thats not fair becuse this is our conutry too adn we should have a say about what the presdent gonna do or what are some of he/she plans to do for our conunty."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52869ac52624,109DCAEA47FD,"the electoral college is widely regarded as and anachronism a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ougth to be [overruled]by decaring tht candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89fcf3a54a0d,109DCAEA47FD,"There a five reasons to keep the electoral college certainty of outcome,everyone's president,swing states,big states and lastly avoid run-off elections ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1dad4245652,109DCAEA47FD,It is possible for a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e2a1a9524bd3,109DCAEA47FD,"The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the popular vote."" A presidential candidate to have transregional appeal.""This is a desirable result appeal is unlikelu to be a suffessful president"". The electoral college restores some of the weight in the balance the large states lose by virtue. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6202cf53471f,109DCAEA47FD,In Conclusion the elecoral college should stay becase it makes everthing fair for the electoral candaiets and so citizen of the united states have a chance to ahve a say in what they want as a president.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8648bca256ab,10BD74EB207B,I believe that when the people of the United States vote for the president it be should be deicided by the popular vote adn not the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+825ae4c791bf,10BD74EB207B,"First, I think the president should be chosen by the popular vote because then all the poeple in that state will have a say not just someone else chosing for them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9688c3a78174,10BD74EB207B,"Most people usually chose for themselves because they have the right. Everybody should have a say not just
+
+""the qualified citizens""
+
+writen in source one. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+22d6fd5d1a95,10BD74EB207B,"Secondly, yes people make bad and somtimes terribles mistakes but thats what we do. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3113c90646d0,10BD74EB207B,"The Electoral College has flaws just like anyone or anything else. Like in source two
+
+""the single best argument agaisnt the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.""
+
+even they make mistakes sometimes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7593e3074002,10BD74EB207B,So yes the electoral college might be useful but it can also be very jugdemental. don't you think you have the choice to choose who leads this country? Maybe you don't but some do.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+059d0d6ff99e,10C8E486AE3C,"When people hear the title ""Unmasking the face on Mars"" they think look their is a face or structure on mars that the aliens built ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bc47a4d7d57d,10C8E486AE3C,But what it's really soposed to be is or equivalent to is a butte or mesa. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6edabab2e272,10C8E486AE3C,"To start of this discusion of the so called ""face"" on mars I would like to tell you is that it is not at all a face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3701be7ae64e,10C8E486AE3C,What it is just a landform that has formed to look so simular to a face or moument of the martians. But mars is like earth it forms things just like it so what it really is is just a couple of rocks and thier shadows to form a face like thing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e83fc0c3f800,10C8E486AE3C,On the other hand is how do we know this. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abda3742252f,10C8E486AE3C,"Well ever since the discovery scientist have been researching and taking more pictures and looking at it a whole lot closer. What we came up with is that like I said before a landform on mars but some say where wrong. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9181096bdd71,10C8E486AE3C,"Another reason that bothers me is how people think its a conspiracy theory. many, many, many people think ""oh its just nothing but the martians"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+663935f8e7f4,10C8E486AE3C,but no this is just a mesa but since people say that stuff we had to prove them wrong. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0e240eae100c,10C8E486AE3C,So what NASA did was they built a big camera to take pictures of it to prove it was a big rock which it was a huge budget problem for them but they still did it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4da3f870ca76,10C8E486AE3C,People may argue by saying so if it is something simular to earth then that means martians were here to and then they got bord of the place they so they left and went somewhere else. then they built this big face of maybe a king or emporer or something and they are hiding from us ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c5a03a6c68c9,10C8E486AE3C,But there not its just a rock. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f14b3c3ebcd9,10C8E486AE3C,"what I am trying to say is that the ""face"" is just a mesa and nothing else but a mesa so if someone says its a face just say its a mesa. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2dd3939cdec3,10E171D3654E,Driveless cars are coming. Whether you will buy or support this new idea or not is your choice. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c6664c86d540,10E171D3654E,I think driveless cars are going to be the new thing everyone will enjoy. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+19382a3896e7,10E171D3654E,"Getting around will be easier, and everyday life will seem a little less chaotic. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa4662e80693,10E171D3654E,Even though you may get bored and want to drive ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1f8d5cd59461,10E171D3654E,you may now text without your life being at stake as it says in the last sentence of paragraph eight. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+48d8736eef95,10E171D3654E,The question that may pop up in a lot of consumers mind is what if something goes wrong wit the system of the driveless car? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+52c259db7d3c,10E171D3654E,"Manufacters not only want the people to be safe but want their product to sell as well as the story quotes in paragraph 8, last line. Why sell something messed up to the people to have them get seriously injuried and then no one buy it because of its bad reviews? Therefore, I believe manufacters would test and secure its driveless car product for safety before putting it out there on the market. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+93b4bb2f8c72,10E171D3654E,"When running late for work or school, you can easy just have your car start and drive as you are preparing for a meeting, answering missed calls or texts, or simply applying today's makeup for school. This also gives you a chance to sleep in later and be more rested. There are so many teens and adults who lose lives because of people who slip a text and look down from the wheel for five seconds. This could stop with driveless cars. With the growing software and media over the years, engineers have managed to do the impossible that we only see on television in the movies as it says in paragraph two ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a8f83a70b69,10E171D3654E,"As it states in paragraph nine, ""most driving laws focus on keepng drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawakers know that safety is achieved with alert drivers."" The driveless car law would not pass if this was going to fail or become reckless. We grow closer to driveless cars each waking day. In paragraph ten, it is said that Tesla has projected a release for a car capable for driving autopilot ninety percent of the time. You would still have to pay attention to the road but at least you would have more time to yourself. In 2020, Nissan, Audi, and Mercedes Benz plan to have cars that can drive themselves wihtout the work of a human ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be705eff015c,10E171D3654E,Imagine a world where there would be less accidents because of texting or new drivers scared on the road. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aee343330aa1,10E171D3654E,"Please take this new idea into consideration, and think. Our technolgy is already so sophisicated now, what would it be like after driveless cars making our world more organized and better? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+48acef288054,10E7A0414D14,"Many student's do not have opportunity to be part of one school. The school, or the study, are the most important thing for the future, because everyone depend of money, everybody need study to get a good job and make money. Each one know what want be in the future, so that is exactly whatever some need to study. Each person have those own personal problem's, therefore, not everybody have the opportunity to study in a school ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e67428223a5,10E7A0414D14,", class online is one benefit for every student and who want study. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e887a5cab44e,10E7A0414D14,"Is a benefit having online class, since not everybody have the opportunity deform part of school. At this day's should be take in consideration the online class. Exist a lot of method to learn and can be which someone want to be ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a830075720a,10E7A0414D14,One of the cases for everyone should not going to the school are for the sickness ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94fa2c0b28fe,10E7A0414D14,"At this day's everyone be expose to any illness, that's one reason why online class is a good option. At this time study in the own house is a benefit; also working in the own house should be good thing. Is one option work in home when is bad climate or include someone who can not going to work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+730349fc4f84,10E7A0414D14,In one part should be great going to work place because there are another people and is great know about the team work. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d8de1963f888,10E7A0414D14,"I consider important the study, since, is all the necessary for comply the desire purpose. That why exist a lot of manner for having the complete study online, or in the school. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c315845a28b9,10E7A0414D14,"Also, exist the disadvantage of which online class have a high cost. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5e6b58c838b0,10E7A0414D14,That cause the low chance of opportunity to person's who not have the necessary budget to pay. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+578461f6278e,10E7A0414D14,"think we live right now the perfect example for study online, cause of all things happen in a different school's and also the illness that everybody are confront around the world. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec34e3125ea9,10E7A0414D14,In the old year's people do not having help for study and make future plan. The new youth have a big opportunity for make future plan at this time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95722e02262b,10E7A0414D14,"Most people know that in this time the technology are the most important thing, therefore, it is possible do not be physical present in a classroom but can listening and see live class, basically the video conferencing ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+50d33b6443c4,10E7A0414D14,"Having class in the own house should a good option because, give us more time to do the homework and study. Some student's who can be present in the school, need complete class, so student's use online class to comply that. Furthermore, is a good help to student's. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bfad194a2119,10E7A0414D14,"Finally, for my viewpoint will be a good benefit for many student's can study online. Taking consideration the problem's, and the different opportunity from each one, should be excellent option online class. People create another opportunity, showing that nothing is impossible for comply what people want. However is a benefit for all, having online class. It is necessary for what all can confront, and decide study online or physical in a school.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c286d93b6573,11168209A49C,"I am writing this letter to inform you that I do believe in your decision in making all the students of
+
+SCHOOL_NAME to do community service. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0f6ce09f7454,11168209A49C,I think they should do it because community service it a great way to interact with younger children and the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6a2af142180,11168209A49C,There are all sorts of things to do from spending time with the young and elderly to cleaning the city. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6161e658c15d,11168209A49C,Some students think that doing stuff like that is boring because their not getting paid. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6d7847b98d05,11168209A49C,It doesn't matter who you are or what race you are it matter about everyone coming together as a family. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8b80056c85c6,11168209A49C,"When you here the words community service you automatically think that its for bad people , but it's not ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c320d20eb8b,11168209A49C,I would describe community service as a chance to reach out to people. It's just not about cleaning up you can have fun raisers. You can also have community get-togethers to help support breast cancer or something like that ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e88e309d1b34,11168209A49C,It really doesn't matter just show your community some love ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f0b72b72aea0,113000585851,There has beeen some recent heat on the topic of the Electoral College. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cb197f6b0946,113000585851,I believe that it is only fair to keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b4d797c6def2,113000585851,"Although some voters may be upset with the fact that they don't define who wins the presidential election, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bc688f186aa5,113000585851,it is best that way. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a97872396342,113000585851,"If there was no Electoral College people with no actual idea of whats going on would vote, and that could have a negative affect. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+12328ebf02c7,113000585851,if there was no Electoral College there would be an unfair amount of votes in larger states. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a3c9c7ccfdbd,113000585851,"Swing States, which is also a very important part of the voting process. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6f4e2017228e,113000585851,"the Electoral College may make voters feel like they have no input on the election, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+99774ef97f49,113000585851,but really they decide who the Electoral voters choose. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c12aaef6de2d,113000585851,"Without Electoral voters, there would be indecisive people voting for a candidate they know nothing about. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8eb44deb2093,113000585851,"For example, many young voters base their votes off of popular opinion, not what they think is actually right. If there was no Electoral College, the Nation could be in a lot of trouble because many votes would be casted off of popular opinion. So it is good to have some control over what happens and who becomes president, but I think having the full decision to vote for whomever, and have it count, is overdoing it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88d10053fa7b,113000585851,"Secondly, I believe that having the Electoral College is great because, without it larger states would have more of a say on who becomes president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f35f816e2cc1,113000585851,"This would be very unfair to the smaller states for an obvious reason, population. Even though a few states might have a bigger population that doesn't particularly mean that everyone in the state will vote. There are still ""independent voters"". For example, as stated in paragraph twenty-one, the election voting in Florida was very close and relied a lot on popular votes. Florida ended up getting twenty-nine electoral votes, compared to Wyoming who only got three electoral votes. State size does matter because larger states will typically always get more attention from the presidential candidates than smalller ones. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+694d3e0c3f0b,113000585851,"Lastly, The Electoral College is a very important part of our voting process becaue of Swing States ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6858101b1b9e,113000585851,"As stated in paragraph twenty, voters in toss-up states are ""more likely to listen to the campaign and the competing candidates"". These voters know that their votes wont make much of an impression on the election, but pay the most attention anyways. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8fbf9f831b9f,113000585851,People claim that the most involved voters should be able to decide the elections. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+660b568400ba,113000585851,Although they don't have much of a say it is nice to know that people do care about the elections and do pay close attention to what is going on. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b0b10aa89663,113000585851,"To conclude my previously stated reasons, I believe that having the Electoral College is a crucial part of the system. Because without it the nation would have so many voters that only cast their votes based off of popular opinion. Also without it larger states would have more of an affect on the votes than the smaller states do. Finally, Swing States are a very important part of voting because voters who know what is going on and actually pay attention do have one of the biggest affects.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f24fd09c0fee,1136D95D28E7,"50%
+
+of American students debate ! ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b5b05f7f50d5,1136D95D28E7,Community service is very important . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bfc1b5875017,1136D95D28E7,But others think it takes too much time away from what they need or want to do . ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b3975e67e869,1136D95D28E7,There are many ways in which students can help there communities . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56a8936b6cc3,1136D95D28E7,"I understand that there are those of you who will disagree that TEACHER_NAME
+
+should require all students to perform community service , ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+feb1d6dd0356,1136D95D28E7,"but research shows that 90% of students that perform community service will be doing themselves and there neighborhoods good !
+
+Experts agree that doing community service will help the world ! ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9188bc404392,1136D95D28E7,"OTHER_NAME , award winning community service performer , says "" by doing community service you are being a great citizen "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1afdac2944ed,1136D95D28E7,"For instance , doing community service involves doing lots of things like picking up trash so that the environment can be more cleaner , Help recycle so we don't have to kill things like trees and forest , and even going to the nursery homes and showing the elders that they have not been forgotten . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa2bd13ac457,1136D95D28E7,"Not doing community service is like letting bad people escape from jail , ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+abfb913a9dfb,1136D95D28E7,it make the world a less comfortable and even harder place to live in ! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c145f04f5585,1136D95D28E7,12 out of 12 students will not regret making the choice of doing community service ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8acb7513e9e,1136D95D28E7,"For example , when i was in 5th grade my school (SCHOOL_NAME) did community service by going outside in the school parking lots , playgrounds , and classrooms to pick up trash and all the litter .
+
+So why not want to do something to help your community ? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+231385c14977,1136D95D28E7,"Without a doubt , doing community service helps people to learn that it is not a time waster. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+867f857735de,1136D95D28E7,"OTHER_NAME , american citizen and community service program founder , says "" doing community service is not a time waster if it's helping your community ! "" Not helping your community is like not helping someone that really needs help , heartless! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0c3f86e188c,11461A6C46C6,I believe that we should change to the popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c676ba3f2522,11461A6C46C6,"There are three main reasons why. One, the people are being ruled by this president, don't you think every one should get a say in who they want the president to be ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d796a6ff1a8d,11461A6C46C6,"Two, Electoral College is not at all fair ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6402a5a8135e,11461A6C46C6,Lastly if you have all the people of the United States vote then the process will be more accurate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fdc4e8496c7,11461A6C46C6,"When you're about to get a brand new car, what do you do? You take it out for a test drive, and see how it runs, and if you like the design and the features it has. Am I right? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+977f6e578f51,11461A6C46C6,"Well think, if your about to get a new president, and let me remind you they will be in charge of the way you live, don't you think you want to have a say in wether or not you like him or her? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+254c185f528f,11461A6C46C6,"It's just like testing out a new car. You bring your family and take a vote on who likes it. The more votes you have the better, because then you see how many like it and how many don't. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07328257dcbb,11461A6C46C6,This Electoral college is not fair at all ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbc7ad4dbe25,11461A6C46C6,"It only allows 538 people to get to vote for president. What if the majority of those people wanted a certaint president, and the people that didnt get to vote wanted the other president. Thats not fair. Those people didn't even have a chance. If you weren't apart of the Electoral college how would you feel? Isn't the United States ""The land of the free."" Then every one should have a say in who their president is going to be. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+343970b75698,11461A6C46C6,If you have every one in the United States vote then the dominant vote will be much more efficent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fdc92e66ae2,11461A6C46C6,"More people will be satisfied, and less complaints and assinations. Think about it. The popular vote is the way to go. When your doing a science experiment they say to take as many trials as you possibly can because the experimentation results will be much more accurate. Well why wouldn't you do that for something that is going to affect the
+
+ENTIRE
+
+United States of America. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a5f36a413a5,11461A6C46C6,"I hope we make this change. There are so many benefits to the popular vote, why do you think its called the popular vote? The citizens will be satisfied, the process will be much more accurate, and the it will also be fair.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+271b059271c1,1160237A1858,I believe you should go with policy 1 its a good idea here are the reasons why ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a312d00125b,1160237A1858,1 because everyone has them and loves to use them to text there friends its faster and easier than calling. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffb603d59c6f,1160237A1858,"Another reason is that not everyone is in the same class as there best friend so they cant talk to them that much, but if you use this policy they could use the free time you give them and they can use there phone and they can talk to them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b576c00ab8ec,1160237A1858,"Another good reason is that if you use policy 2 people will just use there phone in class when the teacher isn't looking, and they could cheat or they will just get distracted not listen to you and not get the stuff the teachers are teaching and get bad grades, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47cf0e5442c3,1160237A1858,but if you use policy one they wont use there phone in class because they have a free time later to use it in school and they will have it off in there pockets. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f743086a7684,1160237A1858,"I just hope you listen to me TEACHER_NAME
+
+it will make all the students happy. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+76428cba02fd,116ED6BCEA4E,I think student should be able to help do community service ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+a187830c9a20,116ED6BCEA4E,we should keep out community clean ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e03692ddade,116ED6BCEA4E,help out people that is in need ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ef64c6cabbf,116ED6BCEA4E,"Its an good idea to help out our community cause without our help our community would look trashy and dirty, for example the side walk is always fell with trash, help keep it clean by bringing people along and clean it up am sure that will make them have something to do. People will think that we don't take care of our community like we should if we don't. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5198549a670e,116ED6BCEA4E,"and we need to help them out by for instant donating food for the food pantry, donating old clothes that you don't need, and more. We need to keep our community looking good and experience. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+932ccb004a2f,116ED6BCEA4E,Helping our community will make you feel good about your self and helping somebody out will make you feel like you have achieve something in life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf09c7596d11,116ED6BCEA4E,From my experience helping your community will make you a better person in life and you could feel that you have done something important for your community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3af2319e246c,116ED6BCEA4E,Finally students should be able to help our community out cause it will help them in school by bring their grades up or by getting an award from your principal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c873bb50a16,116ED6BCEA4E,"So don't waste time playing and goofing around when somebody is in need, go a head an help them out am sure they will feel thankful that you have done something. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0b1b1de133f0,116FB053BEC7,I believe they should change the voting to popular votes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a8edcfabda54,116FB053BEC7,n my perspective voters are the most important in the elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe9116478562,116FB053BEC7,There opinion on the president should be able to count either way. Lots of voters feel left out like there opinion dont count. Sometimes the president elected by the electoral college is not the one every one wanted, he has diffrent points of view in what he want to do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+cc07dbf7e71c,116FB053BEC7,"
+The president that the electoral college has elected is not always the one everyone expects to be. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdda5791ada7,116FB053BEC7,Lots of presidents have won by electoral college not by the voters. These presidents that are elected by the electoral college can possibly be the presidents to bring the United States to the ground. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+088cfcaa6e14,116FB053BEC7,The voters feel they know what is best for our country. They always elect the person that will bring America to the top. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb26aa549a12,116FB053BEC7,"For example Barack Obama he is helping immagrants go back to school be able to get a job and be something in life, like maybe a mechanic,doctor, or even a federal officer. They chances that he has gave us lets people know that these are the type of presidents we need. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e899ded6444f,116FB053BEC7,People feel left out because if the electoral college ar the people that are going to select the president what is the point in voting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55bc81ef8a98,116FB053BEC7,Lots of them feel that electoral college is more important than what we the people think. The electoral college doesn't let people feel that the person hat they have selected is the president that will help out the United States Of Americam to become number one. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a6b450308e2,116FB053BEC7,On the other hand people believe that the electoral college is good and we should keep having it. They believe this because because they think that they know what is best for us. Also that their vote is the best option than ours. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+882ff24d767f,116FB053BEC7,I believe that the president should be able to win by popular vote because we the people shall select the best president. The president that will once again put the U.S back on top. The president that wins should win by popular vote not by the electoral college.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2ad17420e964,11A4E36A48AF,"the presidental election is to find a new leader of the united states he basicly has to pass laws and do taxes we vote to make sure we get the right president we dont want someone thats gonna make silly laws and taxes the people to much the president has to take charge has to go to  world meetings has to be a role model for the younger people in the world the president has to do alot of work now the vice president has to do what the president cant do sometimes other times hes just there to help the president when he needs him like when the presidents gone on vaction the vice president does his work for him but sometimes the vice president messes up with paperwork so thats why we need to chose the best president not someone random that makes silly laws and to mess up on paperwork and to raise the taxes on the people the president also helps with things going on around the world he also a role model not only to college kids but to highschool kids to so thats why we vote not to pick someone to be specail for the job but to be specail rolemodel for the younger kids he also needs to speak for the people and for his country not for taxeing people or makeing laws its about the people always has been always will be about the people its up to older people and college kids to chose the perfect president if we chose the wrong president are country chould fail  and laws chould be broken and taxes whould be high and fights whould happen just one president chould ruin it all for everyone the majority of the college students vote but some dont cause they dont care or either dont beleave in voteing for a guy to run our country some older people dont care for it either but they vote anyway the vice president cant do some of the jobs that our president can do like things to do with the army or with other world leaders it takes alot of skills to deal with alot of screaming people at you like big world leaders yelling at you all day cause you did something wrong or they did something wrong to eachother but the president does a good job cause we voted for a guy that can handle this job that he can handle them yelling at him he can take the pressaure of being a role model a president a father a teacher cause hes basicly teaching the college kids dont give up on your goals they can happen maybe one day a college student wants to be president and the president is their rolemodel basicly he has to teach the world that dont give up when the going gets tough cause if you do then you wont get anywhere in life but if you work hard you can do anything thats why we vote for the president not for a leader whos  bossy and throws laws in our faces but a president whos a rolemodel a teacher a father a leader only one state casts one vote the single representavite from wyoming represents 500,000 voters so image that many voters voteing for one guy to run for our country thats alot of voters but we need that many votes cause we dont know if we pick the right president or the wrong one until he gets into office and starts makeing taxes and laws then we can tell if hes a good president or a bad one we spend a week after just watching what the new president does under pressure he has to go under some tests for a couple of weeks befor we know if hes bad or not the president has to get use  to guards being around him every where he goes cause they have to protect him from danger like bombs and other stuff the president is targeted alot because hes the rolemodel for the usa so are enemies want to hurt him so thats why hes guarded 24/7 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c748d7899646,11A4E36A48AF,every day and every night and even when the presidents done being the president they still have guys protecting them from danger. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e0fa54bf6eb1,11B1A5FB25A8,I would say lets get rid of the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bfd55d820915,11B1A5FB25A8,because the voters vote for slate of electors. They really are not letting the people speak their mind about who should really be president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f506bf915c40,11B1A5FB25A8,"Like it said in the story and I quote""
+
+sometimes the slate of electors might vote for the other side 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d2a025129ee,11B1A5FB25A8,""". Also it says in the passage that the electoral college vote ""is unfair, outdated, and irrational"". The eletoral college vote is just a waste of time to be honest. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2c21b2d016b,11B1A5FB25A8,Another reason why I think we should get rid of the electoral college vote is because it really doesn't make any sense to have it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4af2298d38da,11B1A5FB25A8,The popularity vote should be the one that counts the reason is because it gives the voters the chance to vote for the president instead of having that eletoral college vote where they can't just easily just vote for the new president. The other thing is that in the electoral college votes it goes by slate of electors well some states have more electors than others like californa and texas all states should have an equal amount of voters instead of just giving the big states the all of the power. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b37df0fe673e,11B1A5FB25A8,The last reason why I think we should get rid of the electoral college vote is because of the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+165110ec3742,11B1A5FB25A8,In the year of 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis. In 1960 segregationists in louisiana the lesgislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democrtic electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. the other thing is what if their is a tie between the two. The whole election would be thrown to the house of representitves. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9b47d7bdfdd,11B1A5FB25A8,These are all the reasons why I think we should get rid of the electoral college votes because it is more easy doing the popularity vote because it gives the people to speak on who they want to be president.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2effce473580,11D0BB882C79,The electoral college is a process not a place ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c9721069aa84,11D0BB882C79,Why would you want to get reid of it if the founding fathers established it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e15212e811f4,11D0BB882C79,It helps people with an education of like law schools and stuff like that. It helps people in the long run so they no more about the president and the history. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+206a9603ad45,11D0BB882C79,Over 60 persent of citzens  want to have a electoral college so we can start having to vote for more stuff than to just let it be up to the president and people with a hier power. They say that the electoral college vote was was one of the biggest election crisis in a while it all happened in 2000. Wouldnt you want the right to pick who your presedent is to lead your country for the next 4 to 8 year. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+acdc68c53103,11D0BB882C79,Wouldnt you like to help call the shots in your state and in your country so your state does turn to crap. So are country stays the stongest to.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a42b00115bf7,125B2995B3D0,"Technology has improved immensely just in the last sixteen years. According to the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"", before 2000, a rover was "" device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars"". Now, humans are trying to create cars that does not need a driver. Though technology has gone far, it has not gone far enough to accomplish such a feat. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bde1f4c57197,125B2995B3D0,The main issue with driverless cars is safety. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71fcb7da5795,125B2995B3D0,"Though there are numerous sensors surrounding the car and the driver is notified when they need to take control, there still isnt enough for a car to work on its own. Even if the car reached the technological point to ensure the safety of the passengers, another large safety concern would be other drivers on the road. Yes, the driverless car can sense when it is about to ensue a collision, it does not have the capability to avoid it, just lik any other car. So, as a human, I would rather trust myself for my safety over technology. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9bce3a6e8620,125B2995B3D0,"When it comes to the law, texting and drinking while driving is illegal. If driverless cars were created and used, humans would be breaking two laws that harm drivers the most. Yes, the driver will be notified when they are in need by lights and a vibrating seat, but if they are under the influence they will not be able to anyways. If they are distracted in any way by texting, food, etc. then they will not be in a ready situation to take control of the vehicle. AS a driver, it would be nice to sleep and the driverless car would allow that, but that would be just as dangerous as sleeping behind the wheel in a regular car. The driver would not be ready to take the wheel or they would not even notice when they are in need to take the wheel. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+724e06f9a72d,125B2995B3D0,Creating a heads up display would add to this distraction and would take on the role of texting and driving. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a4c1f39a4fe4,125B2995B3D0,"Though there are many negatives, the reader understands that there are positives. Using less gas would be extremely nice and would help economy. If driverless cars got to the point where it was only public and no one bought cars, then money would be saved by all. And, with the sensors, the car can drive very well on its own and it is at a very good point right now. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1c9fd3e019a7,125B2995B3D0,"With the positives, though, it is not enough for the driverless car to save someone's life. It does not have the technology to avoid other drivers. And, driverless cars will never cancel the use of regular cars because not everyone will trust them. Driverless cars will create controversy, just as the passage brought up ""Whose fault is it in an accident? The cars or the drivers?"" ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+37b282ab74fd,125B2995B3D0,"Though driverless cars have come a long way and have very good ideas, they need much more work before they can be trustable.      ",Position,Effective,,,
+95c124121bc0,126F954995E7,i would make cars to use for transportion but i would not let everybody paid 500 for the car notes. then telvison have a long been fascinated cause it been there longer so when i get done i would make my cars and telvison. we got make alot drive way and it going be alot traffic. some people dont crash that mean it alot people can drives. Some people can't drive because they didnt pay attienion on the road because text and drive then they crash. people like us we follow the direction on the road so we wont get crash or ran over anything so the car wont get hit by any thing. but we can get together on the road some people like to text and die i dont wont nobdy to see that. Some people dont pay attenion to the light on the street oor not in the right lane or turn when u suppose to turn that why we got lot driverless. Then alot people dont got they driver liences. Then people dont be in the lane right turn when u suppose to turn. some people can't park right because they dont pay attetions. that why we dont get caught. if you can't find what you want then u can get a navigating so you can be on your way to whatever your you go. that why driverless are coming. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+58c263f49c71,127670CABA7C,I believe that if you have a 75 and higher you should be able to play any peculiar sport you want. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a22abe9956ae,127670CABA7C,"The reason is that, because i understand that you feel that if a student has an F then they shouldn't be able to play. Ok , but if they have a 75 or higher they should play . They have a mid class grade. Now 74 and under you know should not be allowed to play because you need to focus more on your schoolwork than any other sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ac7e24e44d8,127670CABA7C,"Kids That Have A' s And B' s have the right to play ,but I think you should let kids with a high C such as 75 and up play as well and if it goes down then no you may not play ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2b0d4b6d973,127670CABA7C,"Your grades and education are very important in your life besides your friends an d family. You should be focused on them more than anything else besides your family cause family is important to. Maybe if you brought your grade up sure will let you try out but i think kids should try out if they have a high C cause they deserve to play, but if it goes down than no. Your going to get kicked off the team. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1fcd73b08c3,127670CABA7C,"I understand your concern about students grades and education, but being unfair to students that have a grade C average is unexcitable ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ab388371a8d9,129427624B81,I profoundly believe that the United States should not keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+36ccae166bd7,129427624B81,"the person who has the popular vote may not win presidency, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa595c659cb2,129427624B81,"the ""winner take all"" system causes voters in certain states to not feel like they are creating an impact ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e2854b8e3005,129427624B81,The electoral college is a process that the founding fathers established in the constition. The electoral college consits of 538 electors and a majority of 278 votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f53860f21612,129427624B81,In our voting system even if a candidate receives more votes than their opponents he or she still could lose the election because of the electoral college ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9e059fa25474,129427624B81,"Here is a prime example, in the 2000 election Al Gore won the popular vote but because he had less electoral votes than Bush he unfourtunetly lost the election. According to Bradford Plumer ""over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" It seems rather logical that if somebody gains the most votes in an election that the country would prefer that canidate to be the president. For that reason alone the reader should side with the idea to abolish the electoral college. Now besides somebody receiving more or less electoral votes, perhaps the candidates tied. In this case it gets thrown to the House Of Representitives which will cause a Wyoming Rep. with 500,000 voters to have just as much say as a California Rep. with 35,000,000 voters. All a tie would do is corrupt the voting system even more than it is. For those reasons there should be an indefinite ban on the electoral college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a2177e160948,129427624B81,Additionally the winner take all method in some states makes voters feel unimportant. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+108df573d657,129427624B81,"Some may argue that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president but regions do have the power to swing an election in an enourmous way. An effect of the winner take all system is candidates not going to certain states if they know they can not win it. This can basically stop some voters from wasting time and voting because they may feel there personal vote would make no difference. In the 2000 election ""17 states did not see candidates at all."" according to Bradford Plumer. How could somebody possibly feel engaged in an election if whoever is running finds there vote unimportantant to them winning the election. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0fece2c3fb24,129427624B81,"In conclusion it is official that the electoral collage is unfair, out dated, and irrational. With that being said we should abolish it because it stops the voter who has the majority of votes from winning, and can undoubtably make voters feel unimportant.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+42e83c898767,12C119C37C62,"America's government was inspired by the Athenian republic, therefore giving the United States  their way of governing today. In a republic government, it is said that the people of the country hold the power of electing their leaders to make decisions for their nation. In the United States of America, the presidential election is held every four years. The eligible citizens in every fifty states are granted the right to vote for their desired president. The process of which these votes are counted is called the Electoral College. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+435368f4402b,12C119C37C62,The way in which a president is selected should be altered to the most popular vote because it produces a more accurate vote of the people and it provides the opportunity to directly select an individual's desired candidate. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3095bb02382e,12C119C37C62,"Initially, the process of which the president of the United States is elected should be changed from the Electoral College to the most popular vote because it will produce a more accurate percentage of votes. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b643fbb075ee,12C119C37C62,"In the article, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" Bradford Plumer states, ""And if an electoral tie seems unlikely, consider this: In 1968, a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election; In 1976, a tie would have occured is a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way."" Being that there is a lesser number of votes counted in an election due to the Electoral College, there is a highly greater chance of the outcome resulting in a tie rather than showing a clear winner. If the election was based off of the most popular vote, there would be a higher number of votes for each candidate, therefore reducing the chances of ending in a tie. Secondly, in the article, ""What is the Electoral College?"" the Office of the Federal Register wrote, ""The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral vote is required to elect the President."" This statement shows that the Electoral College requires more than just the majority of citizen's opinions. If  at least half of the population votes one way, there should be no question about who is the winner. The most popular vote system would award the candidate that was favored by at least half of the population, therefore providing a clear and fair election. Clearly, the most popular vote sysytem would significantly benefit the American Society. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+171fc48083d0,12C119C37C62,"Aditionally, the process in which the President is elected should be changed to the most popular vote because it will provide the opportunity to directly select and individual's desired candidate. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ee25a6010121,12C119C37C62,"In the article, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why event the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" Bradford Plumer quotes, ""Under the electoral college sytem, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" This is not how a republic is supposed to run. People are supposed to be granted the opportunity to elect the president of their choice, not of somebody elses. The most popular vote would take into consideration of every citizen's opinion with a direct percentage of votes to elect a certain candidate. In the article, ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President,"" Richard A. Posner states, ""The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president."" This may be true but if the most popular vote system was put into place, there would be an even more exact number of how many people voted for each candidate. The Electoral College does not voice the opinions of all citizens because in reality, a person is not directly voting for their desired candidate. They are voting for other representatives that will hopefully, in turn, elect the candidate they want. Obviously, the Electoral College is definitely a system that should be abolished in the United States of America. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c10c652b695c,12C119C37C62,"In summation, the way in which a president is selected should be altered to the most popular vote because it produces a more accurate vote of the people and it provides the opportunity to directly select an individual's desired candidate. The Electoral College does not provide a fair result nor a clear winner. The most popular vote system would significantly change that for the better of the country ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d803f00136e1,12C8F1E791D6,I am againt the development of driverless cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+94e423093c98,12C8F1E791D6,"Driverless cars need a whole lot of sensors. Radar was a device on a hiltop that cost two hundred million dollars. We should be investing that money on things that are important. For example help people in need, feed the hungry ect ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+db502ee8aa56,12C8F1E791D6,Why woukld anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3903ce4566d8,12C8F1E791D6,Wouldn't the drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive? we are becoming lazier by the time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5a1a9eace519,12C8F1E791D6,Imagaine how much money the driverless cars will cost in the future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f6bac98b6c1,12C8F1E791D6,"If technology failed and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacture? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a258f3bd4fc2,12C8F1E791D6,"We shouldn't trust in techonolgy, failure could happen. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+690a3497f6b7,12C8F1E791D6,hese werer some reasons why I am againt the development of driverless cars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b5e16b9816a0,12D4F74D6E4B,"i think we should NOT keep the Electoral College, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+041c2f7179bf,12D4F74D6E4B,"we the people may vote, but it doesnt mean the person that is most voted for is chosen ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+89b96defeafb,12D4F74D6E4B,we dont get to vote for our candidate's electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eeb4c3226ce3,12D4F74D6E4B,Lastly when we vote by Electoral college the citizens dont get to have the full call on who is elected ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92b2c82a31f5,12D4F74D6E4B,"We the people may vote with Electoral College, but the vote that is chosen is not only made up by the citizens, but the vote may be changed by the Congress. Now thats not right! The Citizens should have all the vote like popular vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c41a3fb75f85,12D4F74D6E4B,The Citizens should choose who is voted for because they are the ones who are going to help us ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f24fd056d20f,12D4F74D6E4B,"
+We dont get to vote for our candidate's electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cecebe7fb172,12D4F74D6E4B,The citizens of the United States sould be able to vote for who we want our candidate's electors to be. This is because if something goes wrong we will have the right to change the electors and be happy about who they are going to be. We cant do that with Electoral Voting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+621aae42b0ad,12D4F74D6E4B,Lastly when we vote by Electoral college the citizens dont get to have the full call on who is elected. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87c6ac347e39,12D4F74D6E4B,"If we dont get the full call on who is elected then why even vote.
+
+""We the people
+
+"" means the citizens not over ride the citizens votes and just do what they want. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98170ac86cad,12D4F74D6E4B,"Now this is my statement on the Electoral College. I disagree with most of everything the Electoral College has to offer not just me but everyone in the United States. Now lets make the election of our president by popular vote of qualified citizens. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5db85766200d,12E285708DA2,"Are you kidding me, you actually think that figure on mars was created by aliens?'' ''Yeah I do, if it isn't aliens then who or what made that face on mars.'' ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+66aa128311bf,12E285708DA2,"I dont know how that got there, but i'm telling you now it wasn't made by aliens ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d029cdb92fd3,12E285708DA2,As you can see the three different photos showing the figure on mars was just a misunderstanding. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff8046d9e860,12E285708DA2,"In the 1976 photo it looks blury, but in 1998 and 2001 photos you can see it more cleary. In the article it states '' The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.'' So that means the clouds made it look like a face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a703446ecba3,12E285708DA2,Also during 1976 the pixels on the camera could have been bad so it could't take clear pictures. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c478425ce7c5,12E285708DA2,"In the image 3 it shows it more clearly, so that means technology has gotten better. According to the article it says ''Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. That proves that the camera in 2001 was better then the camera in 1976. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d21002c9a3ea,12E285708DA2,Nobody will ever know if aliens made that figure on mars that looks like a face. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9d1123d9fe77,12E285708DA2,"It could have been a butte or a mesa. For example in the passage it states ''There must have beem a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on their monitors. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+192494f2d995,12E285708DA2,"''So there, I proved to you that the face on mars was just a mesa.'' ''I don't care what you say im sticking to my opinion.'' ''Okay what ever, I know i'm right and you're wrong.'' ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+aecd90522922,133299B36ADF,Why do you think ther is a face on Red Planet called Cydonia. Well ther is not the olny thing that is up ther is a wast land of nothing. Dont let consperisetheres out ther fool you. I will show you the facts and prove to you ther are no aliens up there. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0d83d7f18dc1,133299B36ADF,In the story it states that the faces up there are olny land forms ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c3d39e80f6d7,133299B36ADF,Land forms are shaped over thousinds of years. As the years go on the land form gets smaller and smaller. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+143dd44b3b76,133299B36ADF,"Also the planet can not suport life. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2efe97f667a,133299B36ADF,All the consperisetheris out ther dont know what they are talking about ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+df7ee2a3ac2c,133299B36ADF,They dont have the evidens to provide like everone else hase. nasa is a groop of scintest the consperisetheris are a groop of craze people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c8254708509,133299B36ADF,thes is why you shud not blesve everthing you see on the internet. lisint to the scintest. leav them in charge ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+929cf6fb35b8,1357329AAA22,The electoral college should be changed it is confusing to some and straight up a waste of time to everybody else.  ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0548a7618829,1357329AAA22,"In soure two part ""
+
+What's wrong with the electoral college
+
+"" paragragh ten it says something that I think will help my claim a lot.  ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f56018a59f7,1357329AAA22,"Now if this statment is true then how would you know what or who these people stand up for or even who picks out the electors in the first place? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85f40b17b49c,1357329AAA22,"This qoute might be the think that I agree with the most.  At the same source as last time but this time in one paragragh down.  It says ""the single best argument agianst the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.  ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db9ed16c621f,1357329AAA22,"The american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse.""  Now just remeber when I said who elects those people anyway, well I did some reading and it said that the state legislature are technically responsible for picking electors, but the electors can always defy the will of the people. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f50d598ca182,1357329AAA22,"Now all of the evidence should make you want to get away with the electoral college, but if ot then this last paragragh should it will tell you everthing that i already have but in a diffrent point of view. In paragragh thirteenteen of the
+
+""What's wrong with the electoral college""
+
+source it agrees with every thing that I have typed. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05d71ccd2bc8,1357329AAA22,"It says that At most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4aa4d1649353,1357329AAA22,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning, foucsing only on the tight races in the
+
+""swing""
+
+states.""  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+327ab61bd8f9,1357329AAA22,"Now if  am rght then every one who reads this exet mabye the electoral college will agree that it is unfair, outdated, and irrational.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e215808d983d,1361D5E04DC3,"Why do we have Vice Presient,Presidednt,ect..? Its because of our founding fathers. They decided that it would be easier if we had people controling the world that we live in. They also came up with a system for this its called,Electoral College. this system helps to decide who the President,Vice President,House of Representatives ect,... Each candidate running for Presidentin each state has his or her own group of electors. You can choose your state's electors when you vote for a candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7080eab637ed,1361D5E04DC3,"After the Presidential election,your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors. This certificate also declares the winning presidental candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent yuor state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year. Your states Certificates of ascertainments are sent to the Congress and National Archives as part of the official records of the presedential election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3ef50be5c45,1361D5E04DC3,"Under the electoral college system,voters vote not for the president,but for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the presient .Voters sometimes get really confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3827ebd38717,1361D5E04DC3,"Voters cannot always control who they are voting for but that is ok. the state decides who to pick the elctors thats in first place. Its ok to make mistakes sometimeas. HEY were all human ,no matter what were will never change ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2253029a1fbe,1361D5E04DC3,"If uyou want to pick a person that you think is best for the job then go ahead and do it. Its your choise on who you pick, not your naighbors. So you decide,make the right desicons.                    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+929572441775,136441C81C1E,"The electoral college is it right that you have speaker that deside for you? when we pick a presendent when have to think about the out come ad what will change and what is he planig on doing it we elect him. Everone in office basicly decides what where going to do nobody has a say in it. They tell us where we go in war they ca start something they mihgt think they can finish but everyone will be aganist them or they decide who going to war or not and if we come home to see our family.
+
+So think about wen we go to elect someone think about your futher and how it mhite be if they sit in the big chair. also when you go to vote do who desides if we want them to speak for our state teaxes has 34 electors to speake for you and tot ell you about how things are going to ran. But why you mhite ask? because that who you voted for with out even relizing it when you choses president you chosesing you life basicaly
+
+When we trun 18 we all as american citezens have the right to vote but who are you voting for we leave in a non-democratic country where everthing is not ran by one person but sevral and is that right to have other poeple speak for how your life wants to be. most of you say no but that the world we live in today and all of this is based on a populaty vote. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+00bc9ee759bb,136441C81C1E,A dispute about the outcome an Electoral collage is possible but vary hard to because you may have other poeple wanting it but may not see it your way. Every electal vote needs a presdintal vote to so if we do the math you have a state and a country aginst you so the odds arent in your favor. Now there is a method called winner takes all and it basicaly what they say gose! ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ad81918490bb,136441C81C1E,Poeple like the presedent or the electoral collage. So you may not know where your life is headed but is it ok to have them choses your life off of some vote you had no clue you picked him. well then do agree whit the electoral college. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+27f17b888693,139B1A57D6A3,"In the article, I think that the image of the ""face"" on Mars is just a landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+252629c9e106,139B1A57D6A3,The NASA workers think that that the face was created by aliens. I don't think it is so. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4c97bada3b0e,139B1A57D6A3,"When it says in the article ""The camera on the board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze."" From the image they took, I don't see anything that has to do with aliens, and if they think the holes and landforms are made from aliens, well they are not because one aliens don't exist, and two holes can be their because of meteroids ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5d0431025ae,139B1A57D6A3,"Also how I think the face is a natural landform, the mount next to it doesn't look like a face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e11eba3ebac,139B1A57D6A3,"It just looks like a regular, normal landform, or it could of been from a meteroid that fell. If they think that aliens made those mount, they need to prove it with images of the rover going around Mars, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19a69c01e372,139B1A57D6A3,"On the top image of the article, it shows the images throughout the years of 1976 (left), 1998 (middle), and 2001 (right). The first image of 1976 which was taken by Viking 1 does look like a face at first, but you never know, they probably used a camera that wasn't really good, and the image was blurry. I think that is why the landform looks like a face. The second image of 1998 which was taken by Viking 2 is a little more clear, but also still looks like a face, but it is starting to fade away, the nose, mouth, and eyes. The third image of 2001 which was taken by NASA does not look like a face at all. The landform has all kinds of cracks, and lines on the mount.
+
+With the images, in the article is says ""Twenty Five years ago something funny happened around Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+082bfdc735df,139B1A57D6A3,"So that was twenty five years ago when they took that photo, so that proves that in that time, they didn't have all kinds of cool techology to take photos that are really clear. Unlike in 2001, they had really good technology to take clear images to take a photo of the mount or whatever you think it is. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+90f919b7c173,139B1A57D6A3,"When they say that the aliens made the Face, you might not want to go with it because they might research it, but they also might assume what it is right away ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+effee024b2f2,139B1A57D6A3,"And how they thought it was a face in 1976, they might of not had good technology in the 1900s. And they still believed it when they took the 2001 picture, and they even have good technology now. I don't know if they still believe it now, but if they do, that is suprising me. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+934f2a4f1c9e,139B1A57D6A3,"When people put anything online about how they think it something, don't believe it until you see it yourselve. Either on the computer, or a book. But you don't have to go with what everyone is saying just because they think it is that, go look it up yourself, and if you don't think the image is compared to what they think the image is. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7eb41eaca038,13A4CE233CDA,If the principal is considering a new cell phone policy there are a lot of things she should know. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+68183f967419,13A4CE233CDA,If she has a policy where students can use their phones during lunch and nution' but during class would be great. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2f134212c08c,13A4CE233CDA,"Many kids would enjoy coming to school because they can talk with their friends but when class time came they would have to turn off their phones. If the other police that phones ant be used at all wouldn't be good. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd9d19d6c8a5,13A4CE233CDA,With no phones kids would text during class when the teacher isn't looking. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d44eba203e3,13A4CE233CDA,"They would be loosing there education and the teacher would be planning a great assignment and no one would be listen. They would be unaware of what was going on in class. If the teacher tells them you have a test this day they wouldn't know when to study because they were so interested in their phones. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58b03fdea146,13A4CE233CDA,If they had the police that phones could be used during nutrition and lunch a lot more kids would like that. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+962e322d5080,13A4CE233CDA,"They'd like it because they can socialize with friends while they get an education. That way they can just reply to their friends when class is over or if the class is having free time they can talk to their friends. Many students say they are going to the library to get a book when they get any book they put the phone in the book and do whatever. That is wasting their time and someone who actually wants to read the book. They think the book is being used for good things when its not. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45a1851d35d3,13A4CE233CDA,If the school is trying to change the police they should think of the good things and bad things that would happen.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+92bed0d51bc5,13AF1E268C99,"In our modern era, the reality that American public schools have yet failed to implement online learning programs nationally comes across as a damning testament to the slovenliness and archaism of educational bureaucracy. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2906d013085f,13AF1E268C99,"I believe that allowing students to attend their classes from home would benefit students, educators, and administrators as a whole ",Position,Effective,,,
+f19dee7ab159,13AF1E268C99,the isolation from contagious sicknesses ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f929b12e0db9,13AF1E268C99,the efficiency passively attributed to being able to learn from the comfort of one's own home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c582891a92a1,13AF1E268C99,"The idea of implementing online learning programs on a national level to isolate students and staff from contagious illness and disease perhaps sounds bombastic and reactionary at a first glance, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+825468a9c6c2,13AF1E268C99,but many of the greatest epidemics of the twenty-first century have been due to the proliferation of disease by child and adolescent carriers. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cb9be77b52f7,13AF1E268C99,"For example, the recent pandemic-level outbreak of the novel coronavirus in America has led to the closure of all public schools in Seattle, Washington. By ensuring that children and adolescents can obtain a proper education online and from the comfort of their home environment, fewer people as a whole get sick and fewer carriers can actively spread a given malady. In addition to the aforementioned benefits of online public education, accessibility to immunocompromised and/or older teachers & immunocompromised students opens up significantly and such individuals can obtain a quality education with mitigated risk. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3a5cd61a732b,13AF1E268C99,"The second main benefit of attending classes from home is the simple fact that it is, by and large, more comfortable for most people to learn from their homes than it is in another less familiar environment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8eb6a408c0ad,13AF1E268C99,This comfort breeds and leads to an increase in efficiency due to a student being better able to focus with less of the brain partitioned to ease the stress of being outside of its home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6558f050baca,13AF1E268C99,"Better focus, however, does not solely stem from a comfortable learning environment, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0dd06411ca95,13AF1E268C99,"but is rather amplified by the lack of distractions from events in a regular classroom or other students, allowing for an equal distribution and ratio of teacher attention to student performance rather than behavior or minimizing distraction. Grades will go up, costs will go down, and teachers and students can mutually gain from one another. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c87887d361d0,13AF1E268C99,"The slow lurch of schools nationwide toward progress must be substituted and replaced by an accelerating stride toward the future of education and the inevitable ubiquity of online learning to better suit the needs of the students of the current and next generations and to give rise to healthier, cheaper, and more productive learning environments that all people should benefit from.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d50c7c53ae21,13BD2F675384,Allow students to have phones because students will want to use their cell phones during lunch and other free time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+867d68f58a02,13BD2F675384,"Students would agree and so do I, because no student wants to not use their phone all day long while they are at school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2729332c32ca,13BD2F675384,"The principle may agree or may not agree to this task, but students may not be as responsible at school with their phones out as they use them. Most of the students may agree so be more careful at school with their phones out during lunch or any other free time. Students may be happy with this text if all students can follow the rules of cell phones activity. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3df6de451428,13BD2F675384,I believe that all the students can be trusted with this idea to always keep their phone off during class sections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+85a5fc93fb33,13BD2F675384,"If some students decide not to follow this, then you can not allow them at all. Cell phones to me should be allowed, but only if all students can be trusted. Each student will try their best to not use it during class sections, but only during lunch and other free time at school. Every student wants to use them during school hours and have the trust they are given to use them and be respectful not to steal other peoples cell phones when they are being used. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+611f8b558ad2,13BD2F675384,Each and every student may have a phone and I'm sure that they all agree that not having and phones on campus is harsh and mean. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d28126f0d519,13BD2F675384,"I will agree to this task and make sure that other students and not using them during class. Students may not like either of these tasks, but everyone will use one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f381e5c00da1,13BD2F675384,"If the students cant use their phones, then the teachers and the principle should not be allowed to use their phone either. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1567d0189c16,13BD2F675384,The free time that is usable during class and be used at any time for the phones to be used if allowed. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7ff87a37655d,13BD2F675384,Always turn them off during class and are only able to be used during lunch or any free time during school hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ceec346ae883,13BD2F675384,Allow this task to be used in our school as long as all students obey the rules of cell phone use. See if all students can complete this task by not using them during class and make sure that all phones are turned off at that time. Each students can try to complete this and not mess it up for the rest of the school and students. Thank you principle for agreeing or disagreeing to this task at our school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ec827d83486e,13C78F5B1679,Dear Senator Im writing you this letter to let you know that I argue with you of keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c5da40c4fede,13C78F5B1679,"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as acompromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by popular vote of quilified citizens. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation, one for each member in the House of Representatives plus  two for your Senators. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. You help choose your state's electors when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year. Your state's Certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states the know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on thje tight  races in the ""swing"" sates. During the 2000 camaign, seventeen states din't see the candidates at all, inckuding Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters inn 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it. The electoral College requires a presindential candidates to have trans-regional appeal. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite, such as Rommey was in the South, has no incentive to campaing heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a succesful president. The residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised, to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5360720a7fa6,13CB8629B839,I think we should have cell phones at school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f638580c21e,13CB8629B839,"what if something would happen to you? You could have got hurt, need a ride home, or maybe going to a friends house. I agree that students should have cell phones at school during their free time. Like lunch, pe, but they should turn them off during class time. If you get caught texting or someone calling you during class they should just take it up until you pay for it. The cost should be $15 dollars. When you are working or taking a test, the teacher should take the phone up, then give it to you at the end of the class period. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fd0bc9e942d,13CB8629B839,I also don't think we should have cell phones in school ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fd113664f51e,13CB8629B839,"what happens if someone is taking a test and the other person texting you tells you all the answers? Then you are in big trouble, not just from your teacher but also from your parents. Texting in school is bad because you get off track, don't pay attention to the teacher, or you may even cheat. School is where you learn not where you text people. Plus you can see all your friends in school, so why do you even need to text them during school ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f0aa1281298,13CB8629B839,Just leave your phone at home and you can get it when you are going home. I understand if you are in sports and you have to stay after school or you have no ride home that day. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+4525ff77b8ae,13CB8629B839,"All I am trying to say is that just leave your phone in your backpack, turned off. Or just leave it at home. I think cell phones in school is a bad and good thing. But my opinion is just leave them off at home or in your backpack, turned off. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+30380e989a4f,13D83C05F4D8,"The Electoral College is not a place, but a process. It was established by the founding fathers in the Constitution. The college consists of electors, which vote for President and Vice President. The College consit of many electors, about 538 that is. There is a certain number of votes that is required to elect the president. Each candidate running for president is his or her own group of electors. The candidate's political party usually chose the electors. Election is held every four years in November on the first Tuesday. There is usually something called a ""winner-take-all"" system, it awards the winners of the presidential candidate. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3ebb6d16b628,13D83C05F4D8,"People should agree of keeping the Electoral College because without it, countires would not have presidents or vice presidents ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bab41a13e1e8,13D83C05F4D8,Most people don't understand the use of the Electoral College. I think that there should be someone going out to jobs and schools talking to the the new generation and the people with jobs about this Electoral College. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7af8d921e55a,13D83C05F4D8,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote, not for president, but for a state of electors, so what do you think our country would look like without this? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d522fc4b808e,13D83C05F4D8,"For instance if you lived in Texas, and you wanted to vote for David Mark, you'd have to vote for about 34 Democratic electors pledged to Mark. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45f08ed1f238,13D83C05F4D8,"People always seem to argue about this Electoral College, we calll it a disastor factor. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3fb922840a9e,13D83C05F4D8,"American's should consider them selves lucky for the big election crisis that happened in a century. Some people think the electoral college is unfair to voters, only because of the winner-take-all system. During one of the campaigns, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all. People say that the electoral college is unfair; outdated, and irrational. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+944233f11cca,13D83C05F4D8,"There are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College;
+
+1) Certainly of Outcome- A dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4fe16935996c,13D83C05F4D8,2) Everyone's President- The electoral College requires as presidential candidate ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a1d9bebdcb2b,13D83C05F4D8,3) Swing States- The winner-take-all system of awarding the electoral votes induces the candidates ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4dc1b161b2de,13D83C05F4D8,4) Big States- The electoral college restores some of the wight in the political balance. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88136a8ab59f,13D83C05F4D8,5) Avoid run-off elections- The electoral college avoids the porblem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b58cf1059f8,13D83C05F4D8,People still continue to argue about the Electoral College method of selecting the president. that it may turn off voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state Democrats. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f26867fd5829,13D83C05F4D8,The Electoral College is a good thing. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cc708caaddbb,13EE05A75F27,"I believe that we should not get rid of the Electoral College because it is a process thart some people like to take! This college had a lot of electors, 538, and to elect the president you have to have 270, and theres is more than enough electorals so why get rid of it? Each candidate running for president in your state has there on group of electors. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9ba5b29ef5f8,13EE05A75F27,I do not think that the Electoral College is doing anything harmful or bad so I think that there is no reason to get rid of it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30c67d6bf3ed,13EE05A75F27,"As many of you guys know many people vote, over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. They all say that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1d8cd2e40a9f,13EE05A75F27,"Now I think we should also get rid of the electoral college because they backed there answer up and i could not. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f50900c5ac08,13EE05A75F27,"There are 5 reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president and now I am going to tell you what they are:
+
+1.)
+
+Certainty of Outcome 2.)
+
+Everyones President 3.)
+
+Swing States 4.)
+
+Big States 5.)
+
+Avoid Run-Off Elections    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9063a04f34ec,13FB62D377E3,in my opinion we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United Stastes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d7f637b99124,13FB62D377E3,you would know excacly how many people actually picked the president of the united states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+945f2beec520,13FB62D377E3,"Some people might make a mistake and pick somebody they don't want so if you do it by paper, and give people what the president will do for us peolpe might make the right choise ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ae2c854df4f,13FB62D377E3,So if you really feel the need of taking down the collage go ahead and do it. It will be better and in the future we can make another one and make it bigger and better then the one we have right know. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+294b39401e5a,13FB62D377E3,"It might hurt some people I know that, but once we get the new one they won't be so dissaponited because you got ridd of the old one. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86b79676eb81,13FB62D377E3,I know there is the bigger states but  you can always split it boys one one side and all the girls on the other ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+09bcffa7b890,13FB62D377E3,So let's make the good choise and lets get ridd of that collage. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f02e2c723ced,1445C99DF53B,"I think us students of SCHOOL_NAME should have our cell phones during lunch & free period, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+581106daaa67,1445C99DF53B,"because it would make us happy. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8377d1a0da65,1445C99DF53B,This would be stated in the code of conduct saying that they have changed the rules saying we are aloud to have our cell phones during lunch & free period ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33071abfc5cd,1445C99DF53B,"We would sign the code of conduct stating that we would turn our cell phones off during our core classes so we can get our education. If we didn't follow this rules that were applied to us in the code of conduct then we would have to suffer the trouble we would be in.
+
+If not following the rules ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dcf83f8322e5,1445C99DF53B,Another reason i think we should have our cell phone during lunch & free time is because after we eat out lunch we don't have anything to do just sit around & talk to our friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83d6869c6e65,1445C99DF53B,"Like in our core classes after we finish our work and the teacher had nothing for us to do, then we should be able to have our cell phones out during that time too it would be fair. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+194cce9688c1,1445C99DF53B,The Teacher have there Cell phones out during class sometimes & i think that us students & teachers should be treated the same way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6ebcef9dd2e,1445C99DF53B,Even though the teachers are adults and we are kids we should be treated the same way. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85e1695b879c,1445C99DF53B,That's my opinion on this subject ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2f198fad3dce,14543F568419,"Should the Electroal College be removed? Thats been the arguments, talks, and thoughts over many years. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e67ce719d23,14543F568419,"If they we'er to ask me, I would absolutly say ""Yes The Electroal College should be removed."" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4864d00af70f,14543F568419,"But many people ask ""why?"", to me it's simple. All the votes that ""U.S Citizens"" make every four years, never really goes directly to the runners for presidents. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d03326fb513,14543F568419,"They always go to people who decide weather or not they should be approved, wich abviously the should if their whole or majority of the state voted for him/her. But thats not what the the feel, they feel like they need to aprove the runners. ""why?"", you ask? I'm not sure. If they need to do all that, why dont the people of the House Of Representatives just make their decisions? Since it always come down to them, then there's no point of the U.S Citizens voting for president. But then agian, I feel like why should they choose who is the president? If the whole USA are the one's who need to worry about the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+63624ce5ca5c,1456B98CAF05,"We do not think that the face was created by aliens. Although we do belive that it is just a natural landform that happens to look like a face. The way that the shadown is shown on this mesa makes it look like a face. There is really no possible way that the face was created by aliens because, so far we have recorded no life or any unusual movement on mars so we do not think it was created by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+508a433d503f,1456B98CAF05,"The face is not a actual face and it is just a natural landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+f6f33f76bb0e,1456B98CAF05,People think that it looks like a face and I cant not argue with that ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+09b46956b68f,1456B98CAF05,but I do know that it was not made by aliens. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+5c703df91a47,1456B98CAF05,"If it was made by aliens how would they know what a face even looks like, because I do not think that a alien has ever seen a human face before and therefore how would they know what a human face looks like. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c1768d7d6adf,146550E45D18,"There are several reasons for which I do not belive in the process of the Electoral Collage, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bf2eaaadf23f,146550E45D18,First of all the system in which the goverment presides is internally corrupt. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+762cb5bd3de9,146550E45D18,"Under the EC voters votes do not count. Even if the entire state votes for one candidate 100% the person representing the state may choose to say that the other candiate won. Therfore messing up the actual count by saying that all the people in that particular state voted for a singular candiate. Now lets be real no state is going to entirely vote for a single candidate,but lets say that Obama's count for Florida was 25% instead of the 75% it supposeably was. Obama would not have won. It is a well known fact that if not for the electoral collage Obama would not have won at all. Same with John Kerry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7e51bda4d42,146550E45D18,Who are the elcators who voted for him? Who are the electors at all? Well that's something for the state to decide. The state picks up to three people to be the speakers for those states. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d468d5ed5254,146550E45D18,"They try to find,(are
+
+SUPPOSED
+
+) to find a non decided not on any side representative for that state. But that plan has failed. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8c688ece71be,146550E45D18,The disaster factor is the best known argument against the EC. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09ebc9be051e,146550E45D18,"According to S2:""The Indefensable Electoral Collage"" By Bradford Plumer. Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,Bob Dole and ETC all agree on abolishing the EC. After Al Gore won the presidental election in 2000 due to the popular vote of the people, The thing best known as the diaster factor came into play. The disaster factor is a fiasco that happens in the American goverment. This happened because according to the law state legislaters are techically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. In 1960 this happened to then Vice President(also running for the big chair) Nixon. The state corresponders for Hawaii overthrew Nixons oppents electors votes in order for him to win. He cheated to win. He bribed the electors because lets be real who is gonna turn down 50,000 dollars? Its the electors fault that bad leadership comes to America. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19a0ac74bffd,146550E45D18,"
+""The EC is widely regarded as an Ananchronism""according to the article posted by Richard A Posner. Once again yet another reason to Abolish the EC ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe2547de2394,146550E45D18,".Being a Democrat myself the way the Electoral Collage is set up is absolutely preposterous. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a8fb4251163,146550E45D18,"The third and final reason for the abolishment of the EC is simple. The votes NEVER count, like ever. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+11c4a65bceee,146550E45D18,"And im sick and tired  of stupid presidents winning (like Obama the hijo de puta).No single president is going to be everbodys president even the greats such as Geogre Washington, John F Kennedy and Abaraham Lincoln were not everybodys presidents not everyone agreed on their radical ideas but NOBODY AGREES WITH OBAMA NOBODY!!!!!!!! But because of false votes made by the elctives Obama won anyway. But there is serveral things i would like to conclude with look below. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+715bf4b5eca0,146550E45D18,"Anyway the EC should be abolished because it is a poopoo rule. And....................................................................
+
+WE SHOULD NOT KEEP THE ELECTORAL COLLAGE BECAUSE ITS STOOPID. The end.         ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2cfc81d87181,1466D0B06D0D,I feel like driveless cars are not the safest or most reliable solution to human driver cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e475e2624123,1466D0B06D0D,"Sometimes electronics can malfunction so who's to say that the car will always stop, or that it will always tell you when to slow down. Although it says ""driveless cars"" the vehicles still require human assistance. Like the passage says ""Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58635e799393,1466D0B06D0D,"The companies that have tried to make smart cars say that smarter cars need smarter roads. For example GM created a concept car in the 1950's that could run on a special track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Companies figured since they couldn't make the road smarter they would make the cars smarter. Manufacturers such as Google with the modified Toyota Prius uses lots of sensors, video cameras, radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. Also a Dubbed LIDAR is used to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the vehicles surroundings using laser beams.
+
+In the 1980's automakers used speed sensors on the wheels for the creation of antilock brakes. Although sensors are not new creations the sensors on ""driveless cars"" tell the car when to slow down, speed up, or even stop. Companies plan on improving these sensors to make driving ""safer"" and so that the cars can actually become ""driveless"". As none of the ""driveless"" cars produced so far are not actually ""driveless"" but still require ""driver assistance"". Meaning the driver can't just sit back and relax they have to stay alert and be ready to take over if something should happen. GM has developed seat ""notifications"" that tell the driver when they are backing into an object. These seats vibrate to alert the driver of the objects behind them.
+
+Some manufacturers plan on bringing information systems such as ""heads-up displays"". These information systems can be turned off as soon as the driver needs to take over. Automakers continue to work to solve the current problems with ""driveless"" cars. In some states it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. These states will most likely allow them after they have been proven to be safe. \ ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c26ac3f987cb,1466D0B06D0D,"most driveless cars are still a work in progress and may still take years to perfect. More than just sensors have to be added to make it fully driveless meaning no driver assistance, no alerts, no seat vibrations, and no laser beams. Car companies have to make sure that the cars are safe enough to be on the roads before they release it to the public. Safety features such as the ""heads-up displays"" and more would have to be added to ensure the safety of the passengers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ebe38ae315e8,146818D2FAF1,"
+Community service is the gift that keeps on giving, without it I truly believe without what purpose does man-kind have. I want to take this special opportunity to ask you may we do community service? It would be a great learning experience to the kids. If we do this surely the kids that believe helping is wrong will change their minds. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+cd9db15899ac,146818D2FAF1,"Everyday, in the world people are corrupted by the following: losing their jobs, a natural disaster may put them out of their homes, and even just a problem with finances. When some of those people lost everything, they literally lost ever thing except for maybe the clothes on their back and the pride that may have been shattered ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+972c01fe4e02,146818D2FAF1,When kids don't understand now of the possibilities of their future they are at higher risk of them becoming one of those people. This is the main reason why we should help in our community to make it a better place for the follow up generation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+041903ec02be,146818D2FAF1,"There are lots of things we could do to participate in the community, America, and maybe the whole entire world, baby steps! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+77a57b3bc325,146818D2FAF1,"As middle school children we could have a donation fund at the front office, asking for just a dollar, and if they don't have a dollar, pennies are good to. Then after, we could take it and donate to any shelter that needs it the most. Another idea is, we could just spend an hour a day making our planet clean by helping pick up trash, plant flowers and trees, etc. There are many different projects that we can take on, all together SCHOOL_NAME would truly stand as ""The Best Middle School In The World."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6563b871cccf,146818D2FAF1,All students should be required to perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+22dc8aa55e99,146818D2FAF1,As the human race we must stand together united. If not help the homeless help the community littering problem. If not help the problem help the younger children. If we help the younger kids they may go on in life understanding to help you neighbor. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0bb79533eb8f,146ED0274FC7,I believe that the Electorial college should stay because without it the U.S. would get out of control with voting. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d62d086836bb,146ED0274FC7,We need the Electorial college for so many reasons. Some of the reasons are so that we can vote and keep all of congress and our President in order. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2af223af0ca4,146ED0274FC7,"We need this mainly for voting, sometimes I can admit that not everything this Electorial College does I agree with. But for the U.S. reasons for staying as one we need this more then ever so that we can vote and so that we can have president and all our different congress people too. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+560c00cc1f30,146ED0274FC7,Some things that bring conflict to this whole process is that some peoples votes wont have effect in the voting for who becomes president next or not. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6bd909bbe981,146ED0274FC7,"All votes should count, because if they know that why should we even vote if some peoples don't count. It is like we want that president who ever it is at that time to win and no votes even matter. This part is disappointing in the last paragraph of the Article.
+
+It says ""...for example, or republicans in California. Knowing their vote will not have effect..."" Going back to what I said up in my second Paragraph, everyone needs to have their vote count. Everyone deserves a chance to say who they want to runa certain part in the U.S. should and should'nt be. Hello? Remember freedom of Speech whatever happened to that.
+
+If Congress keeps this up people can get mad and riot about that or do bad things to harm people or congress. We need everyones vote to count no mater what. We need everyone to have a choice or say in there votes because they are voting for that person because they think that they are best to run the country or a certain roll in congress. So it may seem really crazy to think we need this but we really do so that congress doesnt fall and then conflicts come. We need this to have everything in congress and the people of the U.S. to run corectly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f21155a2832,148CA62EF887,Americans should change election by popular vote for the president of the United State ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a28bcdff3d6,148CA62EF887,The Electoral College it's not a good thing that is helping the citizens to express thier own thoughts in political ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f2a1ff92ccd,148CA62EF887,"In Electoral College it's not really voting for the president it's for a slate of electors that turns elect the president. This shows that we the ""People"" that have the right to vote who we believe to be the leader for United States we are not really choosing him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6362038b65a6,148CA62EF887,"Additional, "" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer shows "" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+368c173dc292,148CA62EF887,"the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c70d73074bfc,148CA62EF887,"This can explain the Electoral College is ""unfair to voters because the winner take all system in each sate"" that means candidates can't spend time in each state getting their chance to win thier vote from the state for the next four years ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e2223de1dc2,148CA62EF887,"However, electoral college ""avoids the problem of elections in which no candiate receives a majority of the votes cast"" shown in "" In defense of the Electoral College:Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the preseident"" by Richars A. Posner. This can help the candiates to not be a tied so the Electoral College reduced and thiers a clear winner. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+012d44d4abb1,148CA62EF887,What if their was a tied would citizens like a machine take thier decision on who's going to be the leader of the United States ? I don't think so becasue a machine doesn't have a right to vote. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+47c3382cbcfe,148CA62EF887,"In therefore, in 2000 Al Gore lost the presidency but won the popular vote. ""Over 60 percenet of voters would prefer a direct election ... this year voters can expect the popular vote win could again lose the presidency"" explain Plumer. This wasn't the voters decision was the Electoral College ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f2753682933,148CA62EF887,we should't have something that doesn't express our right of speech in political. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a67e3fbbea9a,148CA62EF887,"However, the Electoral Collge ""process consists of the slection of the electors, they vote for President and Vice President"" this shows that the citizens can vote to be the most faithful President to be the leader on this opportunity land. To end, we shouldn't keep something that it's not really showing the voice of each citizens on this wonderful world we have as Ameica. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6998bae0035e,148CA62EF887,"To conclude, we should change election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+162d4154b69c,148CA62EF887,"If we have a tie in the elctoral vote, ""the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president "" this explain we the citizens didn't chose the president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea1802a1b40a,14C15C12DA46,"The Election System should be changed to popular vote. The Electoral College is unfair and irratinol. It should be cancelled, and be based upon popular vote with numbers that make since. ",Position,Effective,,,
+85d7a84ffdcc,14C15C12DA46,Many votes have been barely won because the numbers are so close and high ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2b2e43a90ec4,14C15C12DA46,"The Electoral College Isn't an amount of how many people voted for a president, its for an elector. And you dont always pick your elector, it could get confused and a wrong elector could get picked ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+14c3ce544210,14C15C12DA46,Many states do not have a fair chance to vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c2545d5596d,14C15C12DA46,And one representitive can count as too many votes compared to their own value. Sates that didnt have the chance to see the canidates were most likely ignored wich dosent help because even if the people guessed a vote the electors would give out a large number of votes randomly to a canidate. Some staes didnt even get so see an ad for the canidates once. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50504dda40cf,14C15C12DA46,"""A single representitive from whyoming representing five hundred thousand representitives would have as much to say as fifty five representitives from California, who represnt thirty five million voters.""  "" During the 2000 campaign seventeen states didnt get to see the canidates at all,Including rhode island and south carolinia, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b81f5d2d1506,14C15C12DA46,"These qoutes from bradford plumber, explain that half of the peoples votes were going to wrong canidates as the pepole were completley confused about who they were even voting for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cbca4751da8,14C15C12DA46,"It even seems a little unorganized, the Electoral College dosent make much since either based on the information given, but what you should really think about is how the Electoral College has hint of trying to cheat its way into electing a canidate. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b17047a5625,14C15C12DA46,"The voters are left with an unfair outcome at almost every election because of the Electoral Collage. The votes can either be very close or the people could miss Ads or campaigns for canidates, leaving the people with nothing and confusion all over. Even if you knew what elector you voted for, you cant necessarily pick who it is your voting for and your vote could possibly get confued giving you a bad outcome. Most elections are just slid by and are just based on what ever the Electoral College thinks should happen. So please abolish the Electoral College its is irrational and is not neccessary, let the people really have a fair chance. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cb55f16899d3,14CB51AFA416,There is no point in trying to make some of the kids at this school do comminute service. Some of the kids at this school hate there own comminute. Some of them really love it. Most of the kids at this school would love to do that. there are reasons to make us clean it. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0c1ca7db686d,14CB51AFA416,I thank you should make us clean the comminute or help ,Position,Adequate,,,
+34a869bc46b8,14CB51AFA416,it needs it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b7ae9e07f79,14CB51AFA416,And some kids at this school need a little responsibility. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2705f48c70a8,14CB51AFA416,"A lot at the kids here don't know it but they are a little disrespectful. They will act like there better then everyone. I thank a little responsibility will do everyone here some good. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea3e0c519ff0,14CB51AFA416,If they don't have time out of school ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+db5249829253,14CB51AFA416,maby they will have time in school ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8f03164968d4,14CB51AFA416,They can always make time to help the people around them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2a684123d93,14CB51AFA416,If there really that selfish they should just go were other people like that act and they can live in a hated place. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+51ceff5f4e08,14CB51AFA416,There always will be some one like that in the world. They can act that way or jump on bored with everyone ales. Its not are fault they act like that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7a29208cca21,14CB51AFA416,There should be no reason for every one to not do what they want because of a couple of snobs. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46efda1d1688,14CB51AFA416,I don't care if they thank its lame or they don't have time. If you have time to hang out with your friends then you have time to clean your comminute. Some kids are just to lazy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca9431c0d9eb,14CB51AFA416,I thank that you should make it a grade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3dbadc329c7d,14CB51AFA416,If they don't help there goes half of there grade. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c53d583c731,14CB51AFA416,If they cant like they have a family member in the hospital ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a25ec832ea86,14CB51AFA416,"then that's understandable, but if its because you promised to hang with your friends that's no reason. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c2b9c87935ba,14CB51AFA416,So i say go for it ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+836e54e930cd,14CC75D0E9D0,I think you should at least have up too a D grade point average ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+717cc7ffa86c,14CC75D0E9D0,"even during when i played wrestling, or football i had a D and one F but i got the F up but they still wouldn't let me practice or do anything because i still got that D. What I think the you as a principle should do is u should be at least passing five of your classes and should have at least a grade point average of 1.5. At my school in the SCHOOL_NAME is that policy and i am glad too have it but it didn't really matter to me because i was just falling! I was falling because of all my test and everything ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78222c97f901,14CC75D0E9D0,i think its just dumb if you have to have at least a B average ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4847b7eae140,14CC75D0E9D0,"if that was our school i would at least write a banner saying we should have at least be passing five of our classes and we should be able to have a 1.5 grade point average that's when freedom of speech comes in! So o hope if the principle reads this he will agree with me! It should really be that hard if you listen to me? Don't you wont to see everyone out in the football field, or wrestling mat, or basketball court, or even if you are doing cross country? I would be glad everyone wants to be so active and would change it so you could make their dreams come true!! So i really hope you listen to me because its better if you got people that want to do sports but they cant because at least a B grade point average they could be at home doing drugs, something that will get them into trouble so if u change it too my idea they will be where you could see them, watch them so they don't get sent to detention hall (DH) or anything like that! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bceb18669fff,14D6911BF51D,Please allow us to bring our cell phones to school. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c8c211d1352a,14D6911BF51D,they are not something for us to just play around with. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24b6bb07e27b,14D6911BF51D,"Most of the students that go to this school have android powered phones, which means that most of the kids at this school can use their cell phones to help them with their work if they were allowed the privilege. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36539f198aa3,14D6911BF51D,"It states in policy 1,"" To allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as long as the phones are turned off during class time."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d187809106f9,14D6911BF51D,Either way it goes we have to earn the privilege to use and bring our cell phones to school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+07912270c3e9,14D6911BF51D,"But you have to understand that the young people now are at the age of technology which means that we are more comfortable with technology than our ancestors. You have some kids now that can make technology run around in circles, because that's what has been imbedded in to their brains and it just comes naturally ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+11c89932fe5f,14D6911BF51D,whichever way it goes we have to earn the privilege to use our phones in school so we will really try to earn this privilege ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8db51c55c7a8,1515B6404750,The Electoral College is a process that the founding fathers founded. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+301df92c04dd,1515B6404750,"It is a compromise between the election of the president by a vote in congress and a polular vote of qualified citizens for the president, as stated in line 1. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+4857cdd52841,1515B6404750,"The Electoral Cellege consists of 538 electors. To be elected president, 270 electoral votes is required. Each candidate running for president has their own group of electors. After the president is elected, your governor lists all the candidates and the names of their representive electors that ran for office.
+
+The Certificate of Ascertainment declares the winning candidate from your state and shows which electors will be representing him or her at the December of the election year. All this information is sent to the Congress and National archieves as a part of official records. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e6fd097de63c,1515B6404750,"Many times, people voting for a candidate get confused on who they are voting for, and often get confused. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbf8ab059967,1515B6404750,"This is do the the electors being chosen by anyone. when selecting them, there are no set rules. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b3127cbed68,1515B6404750,"Many people do not agree with the Electoral college vote, as it says on line 11. The smaller states think they should have just as many votes as the bigger states, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1e0bd209bbaa,1515B6404750,"but that defeats the whole purpose of the Electoral Votes. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dcb14874fda6,1515B6404750,"As it says on line 19, Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have Trans-Regional appeal. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5062e3db5bff,1515B6404750,"In other words, no region can single handedly put a president in office. There would need to be two thirds vote to win. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca02fa16498e,1515B6404750,"Our founding fathers feared democracy, and the is why they came up with this process. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87bf09d86596,1515B6404750,"If we used democracy, only 51% of voters would be needed. But with Electoral Votes, it keeps little states from having too much power and say. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4b30015c73e,1515B6404750,"People think that their vote does not matter, because they are voting for the state, not the country. Many people think like this, and choose not to vote, but really every vote matters. People also tend to not vote because tey do not agree with the Electoral College, but why not try to make a difference and put the man you want in office in control?    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a07f4c757140,1525562ED964,I have read a lot about electoral college voting. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c9f40d3ccb83,1525562ED964,It seems like a legit way of finding the right president to be in charge of our country. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4fb8a85a4adc,1525562ED964,"But it also says that it's a compromise between the votes in Congress , and the votes of the popularity from the people. Is it a 50/50 compromise or does Congress have a stronger voting advantage over the people ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68e21f3a0e13,1525562ED964,"I think that if your going to make Congress's choices , able to rule over the peoples , then there shouldn't be two sides of the voting. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+543a72ba112e,1525562ED964,Its not fair to us. It should be an equal advantage. There should be a way for that to happen if there already isn't one. Congress and society need to have an equal chance at electing the best man for the job. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9d712375ae0,1525562ED964,The electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+52440f4fe45f,1525562ED964,"A non-democratic method of selecting a president ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes , the winner. The cause of this is probably because Congress think theyare more wise and think this throught more then the people do. But I think differently. The citizens of the US , can be just as smart as Congress. Maybe even smarter or wiser. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42ffb24d6f27,1525562ED964,I honestly think that you should leave a majority of it to the people because we can the research before we vote so we know which one would make the best choices for our country. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c2c69b72aac9,159FA6D54C9B,"On May 24, 2001, NASA found something funny on Mars. The Viking 1 spacecraft was taking photos of possible landings sites for Viking 2. During that time, it spotted something that appeared to be an enormous head. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5e66654d82bd,159FA6D54C9B,"It looked like an Egyptian pharoah, but turned out to be a regular, old mesa. It is still debated whether it was created by ancient Martian life, or whether is was just another regular landform on Mars. ",Position,Effective,,,
+6b02b3a82048,159FA6D54C9B,"My fellow co-workers and I thought this was incredible. We had just found something that could have proven ancient life on Mars. It turned out that it wasn't. Later, we figured out that it was another regular Martian mesa ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0438b2875f4b,159FA6D54C9B,We were so excited when we thought we had just found proof of earlier life on Mars. We thought we had just made one of the greatest scientific discoveries there has ever been. We were joyful when we saw the Face. We thought we found proof of ancient alien life without even looking for it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d69f1b55cada,159FA6D54C9B,Some people think that the mesa was actually created by aliens. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+940bae809760,159FA6D54C9B,"In paragraph 5, it says that people thought NASA was just trying to hide all of the information. To be honest, we were hoping it was proof of alien life. We wanted to find proof of alien life. Why would we hide that information? That just doesn't make any sense whatsoever. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bdce516fbda9,159FA6D54C9B,The Face is just a landform. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+264b9b3aaa48,159FA6D54C9B,"In paragraph 2, it says that Marian mesas were common in the area the Face was in, Cydonia. Also, the shadows were the only things that made the Martian mesa look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. All that says is that a landform could be lucky and have some features that amde it resemble someone. Plus, how would Martians know what a Pharaoh looks like? They would be from Mars and not Earth. They most likely don't know anyone that even looks like an Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e82cc649aaa0,159FA6D54C9B,"In conclusion, the face is just a natural landform. It may look like a head, but that is just because of the unusual shadows that the mesa has. If my co-workers and I thought this was actually proof of alien life, why would we hide it from you? What is the point in hiding that kind of information? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b43ee8d4c854,15A2119D5A49,"Unfortunately we may not always please everyones needs because that is impossible, but it is a smart decision to maintain the U.S. president election style. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8cc03997bb79,15A2119D5A49,Electoral College is not as time consuming as a popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fca60b9993f,15A2119D5A49,most of the time the outcome of the electoral vote is certain. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49f9e446d663,15A2119D5A49,"Keeping the Electoral College in order to elect our president every 4 years is certainly the best idea. You see an electoral vote is technically a voice for the people of the state depending on the population of the state. Many states are large in size meaning that opinions, beliefs, and needs are not all the same. That's where the Electoral College comes in, they voice the votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72b045dee7e2,15A2119D5A49,"Majority rules most of the time, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cd0856ddeba,15A2119D5A49,Only the 2000 election was disputed over. Al Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet Bush was elected to presidency because of the Electoral College ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+377e516511cd,15A2119D5A49,Even though this election was disputed it has only been one out of 50 elections. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ef6c62f0cca0,15A2119D5A49,"If our presidents were picked directly by the people (popular vote) there would be a dispute because of needs and what the people want. Not only that but peoples favoritism would show. Even though the Electoral College vote depends upon many peoples vote towards one president it is smarter. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3b1477fbe29,15A2119D5A49,Last but not least elections as it is already are time consuming ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9a0b3225d47,15A2119D5A49,"can you imagine if instead of looking at those ""4"" electoral votes we had to look at each persons vote per state. Instead of knowing within a year or a couple months we'd know by the time the presidents term is up. Americans don't have the patience to wait all that time, ""Time equals money."" Electoral votes are much quicker and the certainty of the outcome of what you as a civilian want living in a certain state is very likely. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a845960cf4d8,15A2119D5A49,"Therefore Electoral College should be kept instead of Popular vote, because it is time consuming, it is good for big states, and it is less likely of a dispute. Even though this method is not liked by all it is the smartest and most efficient.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c1e2c191b7dc,15F80BF4B3C9,It has been brought to my attention as to which method of voting shall be used in future elections. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f70c06961191,15F80BF4B3C9,"As of now we use the Electoral Colllege method, but looking back through previous years there is evidence this method has caused some dispute. Due to these problems I suggest using the popular voting method. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0b79ecc565c8,15F80BF4B3C9,The popular voting method is not only a direct vote for the desired candidate of the people's choice ,Claim,Effective,,,
+43568970fe23,15F80BF4B3C9,"this method is also less complicated, leaving less room for many problems. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d0854807279f,15F80BF4B3C9,Initially the Electoral College voting method sounded like a great idea ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c8192ccaffcc,15F80BF4B3C9,but over recent study some people are beginning to become more fond of the popular voting method. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+f959be3232bc,15F80BF4B3C9,"The popular voting method is directly controlled by the people and their vote is sent directly to their desired candidate. On the other side, by using the electoral college method voters vote for a select member of the state's electoral college votes and that member is  elgible to vote for any presidential candidate of their choice. According to the article ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our Despised Method of Choosing the President"" by Richard A. Posner, "" when you vote for a presidential candidate you are actually voting for a slate of electors."" Further evidence from this article (quote on quote) claims there is a "" lack of democratic pedigree."" Electoral voting also only benefits the larger states because of there is a  larger amount of members of the electoral college for the  larger states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e11ebb7dadb,15F80BF4B3C9,Popular voting provides a more direct way for votes from the people to reach their desired candidate as opposed to someone who may not vote for a candidate of their choice. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+60823b007888,15F80BF4B3C9,"In addition to many down sides of the electoral college voting method, there have been incidents in the past while using this method of voting. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6963f728a977,15F80BF4B3C9,"For example, evidence in the article "" The Indefensible Electoral College: why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer, in 1960  there was an indicident pertaining to the election of John F. Kennedy. In his case, segregationists from Louisiana were planning to (and just about succeeded) in replacing the Democratic electors with electors to whom opposed JFK.  This article also brings up another problem with the elctoral college votes in the year of 2000 listing it as the ""2000 fiasco"" and ""biggest crisis of the century."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8e490697ea47,15F80BF4B3C9,While the electoral college holds many faults I'm sure in the past there have also been  pop-ups of downsides to the popular voting method also. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b2c7feaedb8e,15F80BF4B3C9,Through reading a select amount of articles I have picked up more recent and destructive faults within the electoral college voting method. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+590f843e5aa4,15F80BF4B3C9,"In conclusion, the popular voting method should be applied as the designated process of electing the United States President because it guarantees a direct vote towards a desired candidate of your choice. As our country is listed as a democracy, the votes towards the President should lie in the hands of the people. The electoral college is prone to many more problems and is a more complex method of voting. With votes in the hands of the people, voters can get a full "" hands on"" voting experience. As to not repeat myself, in this way voters can really understand the voting system and get the idea in their head their vote is going towards their chosen candidate. Popular voting has not only been proven to be the more preferred method of voting, but in my opinion, shall be the established method of voting to use in the future elections.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2b4c75e1da27,160060CC2418,"Community service: an assignment that many students detest. Many say that it's too time consuming, that they have better things to do. Others just don't see the point of providing a service to their community. Whichever side you're on, it all comes down to one question: Should students be required to perform community service? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+16f3443184da,160060CC2418,"In my opinion, yes. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3b4e5e9a250d,160060CC2418,"As a young mind in a world diverse opinions and perspectives, I have seen that the generation I live in has become a ""me"" generation. In other words, this generation of students has become so selfish and absorbed in their own personal needs, they've forgotten that there are other people in this world who have greater issues that they must face. For example, when students are requested to give money for a charitable cause, such as helping the less fortunate in third world countries, they choose not to. The sad part is that this refusal to help others in need is not because they are uninformed, but because they are so caught in themselves that they are too selfish to even provide for someone other than themselves. As a matter of fact, 87% of students in middle school stated that if they ever had the chance to give back to their community in a simple way, they would not. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+63ccb21dba4e,160060CC2418,The point I'm trying to make is that requiring community service of students will push them to lay down their pride and conceit to assist someone else. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+44ede99f7d41,160060CC2418,"To reiterate, students should be required to perform a community service because it will give them a chance to put their ""self love"" on low by helping others. The way I see it, students are on one side of the fence, and because they've never left that one side, they have been led to believe that it is all sunshine and rainbows. However, by requiring of them to take the fence down, they will realize that the grass is much greener in the other side. Don't you want to lead your students to greener grasses? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b296669495fb,160552DF7DBA,electoral college is a process not a place. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+697061e01867,160552DF7DBA,"the Electoral college work on the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice president couting each voter by congress. large populations in states lose by virtue in the mal-apportionment in Senate decreed in the Constitution. popular votes were mostly in florida but in the year 2012 when obama was just beginning to be president, he got 29 eectoral votes it was a success in the same margin in wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes. other things being the same alot of large states get more attention from the presidential candidates in a campaign than some small states do. the electoral college is supossed to be a procces for the electors to vote for president and vice president and every 4 years theres gonna be someone new thats facing the president to be voted for the new president of the united states but when the electors come and vote if the president will still stay the president then he,ll become it for another 4 years but if the guy facing his way to be our new president mr. obama will have to stay as vice president. in columbia the district is allocated 3 electors and something like a state for purposes because of the electoral college. the reason in the following discussion the word ""state"" is also refered as the district of columbia. each person who is running for president your state has his or her own group of electors they are generally chosen to the candidates political party but the state laws vary on how there electors get selected on what there ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6748da99457c,16180FD0AEF8,By my own opinion i really consider of having the votes based off popularity and also facts ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2c4b80691296,16180FD0AEF8,"I belive that some of the people that do want to become president someday will not become that because their votes mainly deals with the electoral colloges and what they really when the counts of the votes should be really counted off what the people of the united states really think or who they think our president should really be. Some people think we should have a black president or a white president green,purple,or blue it really doesnt matter in my opinion i think i am speaking for everyone when i say that wewant a person that would make great descisions for the umited states a person that is welling to go above and beyond to make our countrymore better and a safe place to all . And at the end of the day people in america doesnt want or think that it is right to have a female president sitting in the seat of a president,i say simply because the people of the USA doesnt think women have enough power or orders, or authority i think women should have the same rights as men. But at the end of the day i think that the people of the united states should have a right to choose who they want to serve as or president , someone who would make change and make the USA a better and safer place for everyone. Someone whois very well educated and have a outlook or reach of things. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99f0eea843e8,16180FD0AEF8,It shouldnt be based off the electoral colleges because america might disagree with their descison and cause a whole lot of chaos ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5e42e051b85a,1627A070AEBB,"Hello my name is Mr. Baker with NASA, and we are discussing the landform that looks like a face on mars. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+493bda9c260a,1627A070AEBB,"This is a landform not an alien marking. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+da2b0da886f4,1627A070AEBB,"There are known to be little life of aliens.
+
+In fact this landform looks a lot similiar to a natural landmark in Idaho.
+
+But over the last eighteen years scientists at NASA has been studying this landmark for all of this time.
+
+There is no more evidence that it was an alien.
+
+Because there is not a body for this creature unless the planet covered it up and made the body into ashes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60993ef39fdd,1627A070AEBB,"This landform is very unique.
+
+It looks like a face but over the years the picture does not look the same.
+
+Perhaps it was a alien or something extraordinary.
+
+But over the caorse of time the landmark has built up to look like a face.
+
+The pictures from 1998 look way different because of the technology of then and now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b46b0f9fe80,1627A070AEBB,"If you look real closely to the pictures you can tell that over the time period that the landform turned from a bunch of scattered dust into a pile that looks like a face, but it is actually not. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+58a24a9dc05c,1627A070AEBB,"Reaserchers say this could be an alien, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+5b20815108be,1627A070AEBB,"but I belive not because not one person has found an alien that was alive.
+
+Aliens have been a myth for quite some time now and no one has really ever seen one. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+6a103e7fb8a4,1627A070AEBB,"Mars is a landform that is made up of a bunch of different materials and minerals.
+
+Over time there could have been some solar wind and some of the landform blew away and made it look like a face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e21124aa8f43,1627A070AEBB,"From what the photos show people is a face that looks like a human or some kind of life form, and in 1998 the photo shows that it looks like an egyptian pharaoh.
+
+But over time the land mass has changed so if we waited even longer it will change over time.
+
+And over the coarse of another decade or so it will be changed.
+
+Or if the land mass was touched it might break up the loose materials and the landform will be different. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a010c6c82352,1627A070AEBB,"So at the NASA corperation they study the material and the evidence real close.
+
+It might be proven to be a land mass or another source of life somewhere else.
+
+But for all we know right now it is a landmark until someone has proof it is wrong information. So NASA will keep studying the information they have.
+
+Also NASA is trying to develop more information about this landmark. But until then this is known to be a landmark.
+
+So until then this meeting is pronounced over. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b987f5f383f4,1638D2DC4FC9,"I have read and heard your argument about all students taking place in community service by mandatory rule. No disrespect to you sir, but I have to firmly disagree with this idea. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5b2ead458643,1638D2DC4FC9,"If students should take place in community service, they should do it on their own terms on their own time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+03375f054306,1638D2DC4FC9,"What is community service without the positive attitude to help somebody out? Instead of having this positive attitude in your students, what you'll receive is a bunch of poor attitudes and the bare minimum of effort. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e64643407ad7,1638D2DC4FC9,"I have experienced community service before as I have fed the homeless a few times. Trust me, I'm no angel but I did enjoy what I was doing for others. My brother on the other hand, was lazy, disrespectful, and gave the absolute minimum effort needed to pass by. That does not sound like community service to me. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+42e423f7d1a4,1638D2DC4FC9,"Honestly, the first thing that pops into my head when I think of community service is a bunch of people on the side on the highway with glowing yellow vests picking up trash. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0645cd7e74d,1638D2DC4FC9,Community service? Try a punishment. And that is exactly what these kids will feel like they're being if you demand that they take place in the community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+32e7326cca5e,1638D2DC4FC9,"A large group of students would volunteer to get involved in community service, not all, but a good 30 or 40 kids. From a teen to an adult, students never like being forced into something they do not want to do. They hate having parents or teachers breathing down their backs telling them to do things. When you ease off the reins and give us some breathing room, there will be greater participation and overall success in what you're trying to accomplish in this case. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5cc77238fcc9,1638D2DC4FC9,"The kids who have brothers and sisters to take care of at home, practice for a sport, or just want to have a good time with their friends do not have time half the days in the week to do this ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e89636a79154,1638D2DC4FC9,"If you give them the time to make their own schedule or re arrange days to hang out with friends, you may see a better majority of kids who wish to help out in their community by giving back in the form of community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b586ad1988ab,1638D2DC4FC9,The worst thing that can go wrong for you by giving them the option is that maybe just 10 kids take place in what you want them to do ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+570c794eebe9,1638D2DC4FC9,And then all you have to do from there is just sit down and talk with them during an assembly or whatever just to get them motivated. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d97ad03dd3e4,1638D2DC4FC9,"If for some reason you do decide to pass this rule that all kids MUST participate, I guarantee you that it will make for a less happy, functional school in the long run ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cd7fd95d6516,163A7C9FCF34,What is the Electoral College? Well the Electoral College is a founding fathers established by the Constition as a compromise between election of the President by the vote of Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9992e86a864f,163A7C9FCF34,"The Electoral College was created for Big States, Avoid Run Of Elections and Centainy Of Outcome. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+602df9bb17e5,163A7C9FCF34,The Electoral College will restore some of the weight in a political balabce that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a2e4e5f7965,163A7C9FCF34,For example a large state get more attention from presidential candidates in a champaign then a small state would. The reason big states well get more attiontion than small states is because the biger the state is the more pepole there well be and thats like hitting a glod mine for the presidentil candidates. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+343a0bb4e098,163A7C9FCF34,The dispute over the outcome is possible. As it happened in 2000 ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b34bd540ea5f,163A7C9FCF34,But it's less likly then a dispute over the popular vote ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7897eb55d392,163A7C9FCF34,"For example in the 2012's election with Obama and Romney' Obama received a 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. Even A very slight plurality in the state creates a landslide electoral vote victory in that sate. Even a tie in a nationwide electral vote can happen because the total number of votes is 538 and 538 is an even number, but it is very unlikely. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83e3a8084823,163A7C9FCF34,To Avoid Run-Off Elections The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in witch no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+03c28468988e,163A7C9FCF34,"There is pressure for the run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the elections of the cast and that pressure, witch would greatly complicate the presidentail election proess and is reduced by the Electoral College witch invariably produces a clen winner.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2698a7569d35,164F2115421D,I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0282f7d4866e,164F2115421D,The electon could have a bias opinion and go against what the people want ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+582f506ef45f,164F2115421D,"""It's offical: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.""  Also, in 1976 if a mere 5,559 voter in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii would have voted differently it would have been a tie.  That would have been a catastrophe.
+
+In 960 segregationist almost succeded in replacing the democratic electors with electors who would haved picked John F. Kennedy's opponent.  Also, during the 1960's in Hawaii Vice President Richard Nixon had been presiding over the senate, validating only his opponent's electors. Although, he had done so without creating a precedent.
+
+The Electoral College is a non-democratic method of selecting a President.  The five reasons we have retained the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigree.  All are practical reasons not conservative and non-liberal reasons.  With other things being equal other things are not.  Also, larger states will get more political attention from presidental candidates in a campaign verse a smaller state.                                                                     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5a7ad4d63e7a,1669F1CC90D9,i think that this is a good thing and a bad thing mostly good ,Position,Adequate,,,
+85f654293689,1669F1CC90D9,The good things are that it mite get some kids grades up and push them to do it to play sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f33d558c0da,1669F1CC90D9,"then the kids that get bad grades now will see u have to be a good student in the school to be a good player on the field, it will push them to see that if u spend all your time on sports your grades will drop and u don't have to worry about sports any more if this rule passes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c722ab8a166,1669F1CC90D9,"The bad thing in this is that some parents mite think it is a bad thing because they know there kid is doing there best but is not making a B so they cant play sports, so you mite have issues with that. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e53ef6e79fa7,1669F1CC90D9,I also think if u do that some kids will not try and u would not have as many players so u will have a smaller team for every thing ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f385a9cfa3b4,1669F1CC90D9,Over all i think it a good thing. They learn how to do good in school and sports and to be responsible. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+96e954b43ae1,16D1A7B1BC84,There is a presidential campaign being held. There are two candidates running. the decision depends on the electoral votes. The Electoral College are the votes that elect the President depending on the majority votes. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+feba96e916fa,16D1A7B1BC84,The Electoral College should be kept ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1b493bc8c49d,16D1A7B1BC84,because it induces the candidates ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0dab2fc78e9a,16D1A7B1BC84,it restores some of the weight that large states loses ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+073f9040f4cc,16D1A7B1BC84,"avoids the problem in which the candidate recieves the majority of the votes. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a62c61a1fc52,16D1A7B1BC84,"or example, to many of candidates are running for President. People don't know on who to vote on. The Electoral College eliminates most of those candidates. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+837cdf271aec,16D1A7B1BC84,"Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign- to really listen to the competing candidates."" (Source 3) People want to know what these candidates offer to them. They want to vote for the best candidate. When they vote, the Electoral College decides on the majority vote of the state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4353f3e5f259,16D1A7B1BC84,"Furthermore, the Electoral College should be kept since it restores some of the weight that large states lose. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83f1bc923137,16D1A7B1BC84,"For example, since there are big states, there is political problems in what the people want. Large states have a lot of voters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e32cd463455f,16D1A7B1BC84,"Finally, the Electoral College should be kept since it avoids the problem in which the candidate recieves the majority of the votes ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+40c9fcb8b5d6,16D1A7B1BC84,"For example, presidents may have the popular vote but not the electoral votes. The Electoral College avoids run-off elections. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a751eb8bb45,16D1A7B1BC84,"In conclusion, the Electoral College should be kept. It induces the candidates. It restores some of the weight that the large states loses. It avoids the problem in which the candidate recieves the majority of the votes.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+efc4ca807e8f,16E4FB7A2BAF,I am writing to you on the concern of requiring all students to perform community service. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+40ad572fbfcb,16E4FB7A2BAF,"I think that community service should be required from all students because, without help from the people of the community it will not be nice enough to enjoy. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+165f5ef8db2c,16E4FB7A2BAF,"Think about it, without the work of many who already participate in community service activities around the area we would not have the nice parks and clean streets to walk and drive on , etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a567c00ba983,16E4FB7A2BAF,Community service is a good way for the people to get involved in the world around them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a0173980476,16E4FB7A2BAF,sometimes the work is not always enjoyable ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3f75c4774810,16E4FB7A2BAF,but its worth it in the long run. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ef7b1e252438,16E4FB7A2BAF,"Some examples of community service activities that i would encourage you to suggest to the students are, cleaning trash around the school, planting new trees and plants in the park to help the environment, helping at many school sponsored events, and helping in the local soup kitchens around the community. These are some of the easier things that i recommend that you suggest the students to attend. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e131bc170062,16E4FB7A2BAF,Of coarse not all students will want to participate in these activities but ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5d77712a4474,16E4FB7A2BAF,there may be some that are and it would be a good thing to have these opportunities available for them to take in consideration of participating in ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3b1c72c71a8a,16E4FB7A2BAF,Extra credit and rewards would be a nice way to encourage more students to participate in the activities. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a74db06c1e0,16E4FB7A2BAF,Personally i think that community service is a very good idea for this school and community to take part in. It will help our cities be more enjoyable for the people living there now and for many others in the time to come. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9e1bb5514a66,1715A8524539,I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP THE ELECTORAL VOTE ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dc0f87f37ed0,1715A8524539,T HELPS THE PEOPLE VOTING ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+500b078d34c5,1715A8524539,HELP THE PEOPLE WHO WANT TO VOTE ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c101c4a381fb,1715A8524539,THE ELECTORS STILL SHOULD BEABLE TO VOTE ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd1ca8224441,1715A8524539,"THE CANIDATES ARE ALL RUNNING FOR PRESIDENT AND ONE PERSON HAS TO CHOOSE FROM THE CANIDATES HOW IT WILL WORK AND THAT THEY WILL PICK THE ELECTORAL VOTERS TO VOTE AND THATS HOW THEY WOULD VOTE  THEY SELECT A PERSON EVERY FOUR YEARS AND THEY ASSIGN THEM FOR THE ELECTORS THEY ARE OFTEN CHOSE BY CANIDETS  YOU WILL ALSO HELP THEM VOTE BECAUSE THEY VOTE AFTER EVERYONE ELSE
+
+AFTER THE PRESIDENT ELECTION THE GOVENER PREPARES THEY WILL ALSO DETERMINE THE ELECTORS THE PRESIDENTS COULD ALSO PICK THEM THEY HOLD OFFICAL RECORDS AS TO WHAT IS BEING VOTED THEY COULD ALSO ARGUE ABOUT IT AND THATS HOW THEY COULD ARGUE ABOUT IT IT WILL ALSO LET THEM SUCCSED IN WHAT THEY WERE GONNA DO THE ELECTORS WOULD ALSO BACK UP THE OTHER PEOPLE. SO EACH EVERY FOUR YEARS THEY VOTE AND THEN THEY GET TO SEE WHO WINS.
+
+THEY CAN GET 500,000 VOTERS AND THAT GIVES A CHANCE FOR THE PRESIDENTS TO THEY WOULD HAVE 55 REPERSENITIVES TO BACK THEM UP AND GIVE THEM MORE ELECTORAL VOTORS SO THE ELECTORAL VOTERS WOULD HAVE A CHANCE TO VOTE AND THAT THE ELECTORAL VOTERS ARE THE VOTERS THAT VOTE AT THE LAST MINUTE AND THAT THEY BACK THE PRESIDENT UP AND GIVE HIM MORE VOTES THAN THE NORMAL VOTER. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+084c55acc49c,1715A8524539,YES THEY SHOULD KEEP THE VOTERS AND THAT THEY SHOULD KEEP THE VOTERS JUST INCASE THE VOTERS DONT NEED TO COMPARE THE ELECTIONS AND THATS HOW THEY WOULD MAKE THERE FINAL DECISION AND THEN THEY WOULD MAKE THE FINAL DECISION WHO TO VOTE FOR AND IT COMES UP BETWEEN THE STATES.YES THEY SHOULD DO A FINAL VOTE DECISION AT THE END OF IT. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e124295fe115,171E655CC8F1,"Attend classes from home by way of online can be a good idea but , in my position is not a good way for the student and can be innecesary or bad idea in many reasons. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+94ba59a7946d,171E655CC8F1,When the student is in home he going to do what he want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57ffdf87abc4,171E655CC8F1,"he don't care the class he going to feel like if he don't have to do have to work in that class and he don't thing if he going to lost the class, one example is one of my friends he have a oline class but when he is in home he dont work because he dont care because no have one teacher who says ""Work or you no going to pass the class"" and thats one reason. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+47dd2d4ea15b,171E655CC8F1,"My second reason is when the student is taken online classes he just going to finish, he no going to learn ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2d700f2613f7,171E655CC8F1,"because he dont care learn he just going to complete the leasons but just that, why? because he dont have the teacher who explaing when he have questions or when he is interesting in something of the class he no have the teacher who know more abaut that. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf7ae4c96a0c,171E655CC8F1,Some people says when the student take the online class from home he are more concentrade ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dec712519eac,171E655CC8F1,"however whent the student take this classes from home he are more distractic because he have the cellphone in his hand or he have the TV in the room, the dog, the play station and he going to prefer play or see movies than work on the classes. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e2e0bef978ad,171E655CC8F1,"In conclusion thye student can no work , no have the teacher for question or warn he can lostr the class or are more distractict or prefer play than work on the class are my reasons for no take online classes but with the good students can be a good idea. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+51c6ea2ab36b,172F67E7FBBC,i think that you should not make students do community service to students that don't like doing it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b5efab6b5416,172F67E7FBBC,First i want you to know that is a good thing that you thing of that but if students don't want to help and you sent them do something i think they are going to make it worst. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70b067edefb2,172F67E7FBBC,EX: you sent them to go pick up trash and they go and they are just playing around they are going to be fighting with the trash throwing it where it was clean then later when they finish playing they are going to see a mess that they are going to get lazy and just walk away and go to another place where its cleaner and if they are trouble makers they are going to do that over and over again. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d3513d589687,172F67E7FBBC,"if you let students that really want to help out and they do the same thing (throw the trash to each other) and if they really want to help out they are going to clean for them selves. and they are going to be helping because they want to ,not because you forced them to do community service. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9e5503724b7,172F67E7FBBC,I was also thinking of you giving 2 choices 1*students should do community service 2*students get to do extra home work for their hardest classes(where they are almost flunking the class)................ ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4750c93c3760,173DB7DA3CE3,"If the school principal wants to change the cell phone rules , then i think it would be a better idea that she lets the students have cell phones at their lunch period and other free time but make them shut the phones off in class ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3a7db97c0e4,173DB7DA3CE3,I think that's better because the students already bring in phones and use then during class while the teacher isn't looking or not paying attention. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+45363ea62ac4,173DB7DA3CE3,"if the principal lets the students use their cell phones at lunch or free time in school then they wont have to hide anything from the teacher and be sneaky , some students do do that and if they get caught , they get in a lot of trouble ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd891bfb23b6,173DB7DA3CE3,If the rule is NOT to use the cell phones then i don't get why they do it anyway ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a800a644c52,173DB7DA3CE3,"there isn't even ever anytime to text someone while in class because the teachers always keep us all busy. If one of the students get caught , you have to tell your parent to go up to the school and go get it ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ad65be77789,173DB7DA3CE3,"I would find it fair and better if the principal let us use our phones in school , just not in class. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+580e4d765c1f,173DB7DA3CE3,"I always get in trouble for taking my phone out when i get OUT of school just because I'm still on the ""school grounds."" They don't do anything about anyone taking their phones out after school if they see you they just ask you nicely to not use it or put it away while on school grounds. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ef375bde0c5,173DB7DA3CE3,If it was an emergency I'm sure they would let you use your phone or any phone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3b77b01d169,173DB7DA3CE3,I don't think the principal would never give you a hard time about your phone being out on school grounds if it was an emergency or something important ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da95a4189978,173DB7DA3CE3,"it think it would be a better idea to just let the students use their phones in their free time. I think all the students would be very happy with that and agree with it , that way they don't have to get in trouble for texting and being accused of being a bad kid because they were texting in class. That's no fair if you get in trouble but mean while if you have free time why not use your phones while you can.? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+df88d0c3fe1e,178FCB8C1D80,I belive that the people should get the popular vote and that the Electoral College should not be kept because it doesn't exactly help the people. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b71172bdc8a9,178FCB8C1D80,"They get who they want even if the people voted differently,which seems extremely unfair to the people. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+70056e5f54e7,178FCB8C1D80,"It has also been declared that the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational (14), so why would we want to keep it? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f816509302cc,178FCB8C1D80,The people should get the popular vote because if the people wanted the elecltors candidate they would have voted for them instead of voting for the other competitor. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fd2e3844aa5a,178FCB8C1D80,"Some people don't even vote because they know that even if they did vote the popular vote wouldn't win compared to the electoral college (23). It's also who they wanted not what the electors wanted, and it would make the people happier if they got who they wanted and there wouldn't be a lot people trying to vote out the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae6394dfdca9,178FCB8C1D80,The people should also get the vote because wouldn't it make sense if the people did get who they voted for anyways? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+42c2d2d52db5,178FCB8C1D80,Because if who they elected won and turned out to be a bad president then they wouldn't have anyone to blame because it'd be there fault for not voting on a different competitor. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44799afa36c6,178FCB8C1D80,Why would the electors even try to ask the people to vote if they're just going to decide the final vote anyways ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec469333b62a,178FCB8C1D80,They shouldn't because everyone knows or should know that the Electoral College does not benefit them in anyway unless the are voting for the same person that the electors are.    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c78f45a1ade,17C688FD8337,"I believe that the
+
+Electoral College is a good thing. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3e619c1332d6,17C688FD8337,"As you can see, there is no reason to change it so that the president gets his votes by poularity. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2427e8020ed4,17C688FD8337,"It might have been good as a teenager but just remember that this is not your Highschool ""PROM"", you dont just win by fame. Being the president is hard work. If you wish to be president, dont jog for it, run for it. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f982d83635b1,17C688FD8337,"Now future presidents out there just remember that you will required to have a canidate as stated in source 2 . ""THE INDENSIBLE ELECTORAL COLLEGE:WHY EVEN THE BEST-LAID DEFENSES OF THE SYSTEM ARE WRONG""
+
+? ""The electoral college requires a preisdental candidt to have trns-region appeal. No region(South, Northeast,etc.)has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite, such as Romeney was in the South, has no incentive to campain heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his pluality in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable result becaus a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cca6d37bb86a,17C688FD8337,This shows that in order to be an amazing president you need a canidate. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2fc14711201c,17C688FD8337,I am in keeping things the way that we have it now. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f5ed85bca07,17C80F3C80B3,I do not know which one she/he should go with because i know that everybody that has a phone most likely brings it to school everyday. But if she/he says no phones aloud like it is now here people still use them anyway. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ed0fc4535e65,17C80F3C80B3,I think the reason for no cell phones aloud is because you can talk to your friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9701b21089e7,17C80F3C80B3,ask answers on test to cheat and you would interrupt the teacher if you call someone or get a call ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdc566020661,17C80F3C80B3,If cell phones are aloud people would defiantly use them all day long and cheat on tests and things like that. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+372d6bda4b50,17C80F3C80B3,Also at free times like in between classes and at lunch you can just go talk to your friend without using your phone because its not like you never see them unless they go to a different school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e0ef38d8cef,17C80F3C80B3,So if i had to choose one it would be option 2 that students are not aloud to use them in school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6b456ddac66b,17C80F3C80B3,But be able to use them on the bus to and from school if they ride a bus ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+228b634f285e,17C80F3C80B3,it is not disrupting the teacher and you don't have a paper like a test or a graded class work to cheat on ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40ece29ecbcf,17C80F3C80B3,i personally think that students should be able to listen to their Ipods during a test ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1729a160e2a4,17C80F3C80B3,"you cant communicate with people and you are not disrupting anyone by talking, and some people do things better while listening to music like it helps a lot when your running because it keeps you mind off it but it will make you work harder on a test. Or i know that it will help me atleast ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48ab1ab98f3e,17C80F3C80B3,So if id pick one it would have to be the 2nd option even though i like the 1st option better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4f414dc863ba,17E5C17F1A9F,"First of all, what is the Electoral College? The Electoral College is a process, not a place. This process consists of the selection of electors, the meeting of electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and counting of the electoral votes by Congress. It consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 is requited to elect the President. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+38cca7c48580,17E5C17F1A9F,"In other words, under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors. And that`s what`s wrong with the Electoral Project system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ec1eed16dbe,17E5C17F1A9F,"For example: If you live in Texas, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you`d not vote for this candidate, but for a slate of 34 Democratica electors pledged to John Kerry. But who are these electors? Who picks the electors in the first place? Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc9e385c93d3,17E5C17F1A9F,The electoral College is unfair and irrational. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5afee74e02ad,17E5C17F1A9F,"Voters don`t want to vote for a bunch of strange people. The voters in fact, wanto to vote for someone who they had chose. We son`t want to put our decision on someone else`s hand, we want to be in control of our own vote.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e3ed6e51763,1801F16E35E4,"""The Electoral College is a process not a place."" The Electoral college has 538 electors. Two-hundred and seventy electoral votes is established to elect the president of the United States.
+
+Every single candidate running for President in the state that you live in has his or her own group of electors. Usually, the electors are chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what is their jobs and their responsibilities are in that spot. The presidential election is held every four years on the 2nd Tuesday after the first Monday in November. Generally, a lot, or most states have the ""winner-takes-all"" system tattooed in their minds that all electors to the winning presidential candidate.
+
+After the presidential election, the governor of the state that you live in prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment."" That makes a list of all the candidates that ran for president in your state along with the names of their electors. It also shows the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors in December of the election of the year. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+53e74e5fac67,1801F16E35E4,"some presidents don't like or believe in the electoral college, these include Richard Nixon, and Jimmy Carter. According to the Gallup poll in 2000, taken right after Al Gore, thanks to the problems of the electoral college, won the popular vote but, unfortunately lost the presidency. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d103130be46,1801F16E35E4,Over 60 percent would like a more direct vote then have this system in which we have now ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+738b2f1e66d0,1801F16E35E4,single best argument against the electoral college would be what we call the disaster factor ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+788da9c090dd,1801F16E35E4,"Back in the 1900's, 1960 to be exact segregationists in the Louisiana legislature almost won in the fight to replace the Democratic electors with new electors who would not like, even oppose John F. Kennedy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c63d4e88cc9,1801F16E35E4,"At any rate, most people say that the Electoral College is tuned as an anachronism, a person or a thing that seems to belong in the past and not fit in the present. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db5031343031,1801F16E35E4,"The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance nthat large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportion of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. The popular vote was very close in Florida (in 2012); nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes. A win by the same margin in Wyoming would get the the winner only 3 electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b46d0d853eaf,1801F16E35E4,"a larger state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90b9b7ad5a64,1801F16E35E4,the electoral college could have some ups and some downs but facts are that the government are not going to get rid or abolish the Electoral College any time soon. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d783427985fc,184077A08F67,"Technology has become almost fully integrated into today's society. Computers, smart phones, and more are used in a positive aspect; the driverless car is no exception. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9dfab7764d36,184077A08F67,"The development of driverless cars is a positive and necessary one, one that will help improve society significantly. ",Position,Effective,,,
+770fc71b85cc,184077A08F67,"One of the most important features of driving is safety, and the driverless car has been safe. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+944bd1fc95ec,184077A08F67,"Google's cars that can drive independently under specific conditions have ""driven more than half a million miles without a crash."" The driverless car has not been fully developed, yet already Google's cars have successfully driven over a long distance without any accidents. Technology is constantly improving, and so will safety. Google's cars have position-estimating sensors, automative radar sensors, and even a rotation sensor on the roof. As these senors are improving, it is also making ""driving safer and also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own."" Once the driverless car is completed, it should have the sensors and technology to keep drivers safe, more than the ability of an actual human drivers to keep themselves safe. The advanced technology is not only a dream, but is slowly becoming a reality. Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project, ""believes that the technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream."" The driverless car is a ensured success, and with the development of the driverless car, comes the ensured safety of the driver. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1c9d5555156e,184077A08F67,"Not only would the driverless car be safe, but it would also be efficient. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d175de153a72,184077A08F67,"Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with these efficient cars. Brin says that the cars, ""would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus."" The driverless car can be made into an efficient car, saving fuel and allowing for more flexibility than other mediums of public transportation. The cars would be able to take one anywhere while having a better environmental impact. The development of these driverless cars would ""fundamentally change the world"" for the better. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fa53ac7f23c,184077A08F67,"Lastly, the driverless car would be able to provide safety as well as entertainment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4a613892be41,184077A08F67,"Currently, cell phones and almost everything is a distraction and hazard to the human driver. But with the driverless car, the driver is able to maintain his own safety and entertain himself. Some manufactures are going to bring ""in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the drivers need to take over."" The driver can now safely entertan himself and know he will be safe. The technology is able to instantly alert the driver, keeping him from coming into harm's way. The driver has luxury, comfort, and safety with the development of the driverless car, something not available to the current driver. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f670902ef2c7,184077A08F67,"
+The driverless car has too many positives, and should most certainly be developed. The development of the car would bring about greater safety, efficiency, and entertainment to every driver. The potential of technology is limitless, and the driverless car should be used to further enhance and accomodate the experience of every driver around the globe.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0a546fb8fa57,1840AEC2DC71,"I am truely appreciative of what you have done for my state, our city, and to help the country in so many ways that can not be explained. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ba4f9f865dd3,1840AEC2DC71,i think that the Electoral College should stay where it is today ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dbb58641124b,1840AEC2DC71,because it's a fair system in which everybody has a reasonable vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8efde70f2103,1840AEC2DC71,"In ways the Electoral College does help in some ways by avoiding the difficulties and problems of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. For example, ""Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College (301 and 370 electoral votes, respectively)."" According to section (22). But what the real question is here Mr. Senator is what is the Electoral College? It's the process by which the compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. You probably knew that already though. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae7f2fdc5c16,1840AEC2DC71,"In other opinions around the world the Electoral Colege is widely regarded as an ""anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d91821982408,1840AEC2DC71,Even if the Electoral Colege went away what would the government use as an effect to insinuate a new reaveling method on choosing the president? ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+6fbdc9fcbde4,1840AEC2DC71,Also the Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b775b14e72a5,1840AEC2DC71,I have to admit myself that the Electoral College  is unfair to some potenial voters as well. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0d56256e6581,1840AEC2DC71,"According to section (11) "" The Electoral College was the single best argument because of the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people."" Not to mention that the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. And that the best arguments in favor of it are mostly asertions without much basis in reality. ""The arguments against direct elections are spurious at best."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f15a0df3f4b,1840AEC2DC71,"So you see It's not like it is perfect in every way. It just has it's problems that's all. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3b2695414813,1840AEC2DC71,"Mr. Senator i hope you take this letter as a sign as respect from your fellow citizens and as another sign of equality and all i'm saying is that it should stay. Yes it has it's differences, so what nothing is perfect in the world but if treat it as a perfect thing then you will make it perfect. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d681929274f7,1842B5E46878,"I know you set high standards for us to achieve and you will get those soon, but in the mean time, I believe to participate in sports you should at least have above a D. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b95c9708930f,1842B5E46878,"I believe we should support this because some students just cannot get things as fast as others and they just can't admit it, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f4e507793f1,1842B5E46878,"it is embarrassing and they will probably feel they don't have the knowledge and they will just get more depressed. Also they are trying their hardest.
+
+Also if you are so concerned you should just hold an adolescent-to-adolescent tutoring, you know peers teaching each other, because sometimes kids can just explain it in an easier and more comprehendible manner. This has been proven to work in other countries and also bring grades up 45%. I believe this have caught your major attention. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78c315ce3fd5,1842B5E46878,Many kids are not able to participate in these sports because of the new 'school law' you just brought up ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f839bc3e5f53,1842B5E46878,"I have learned these kids do these sports to blow off steam and also just to not be ticked by anything tiny, like a fly set off their temper. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff00fd8f03b6,1842B5E46878,"Technically, you have just risen the bullying rate to 76.5%, yep, I just went there... ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07c4799b4c14,1842B5E46878,"You need to remove this ""law"" off this campus as fast as you can, ASAP! Change the law to: If you have a D- you will need to stay in after school teen-to-teen tutoring until 3:03.
+
+If you do this just would be doing this whole school a big favor in everyway.
+
+I would love to say thank you and hopefully we would do more friendly adult v. teen in the future. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aab29bdb1924,18658BB1E5FF,We should keep the Electoral College for the voting of the United States. ,Position,Effective,,,
+aa96e92e78af,18658BB1E5FF,One good reason is they know for sure who is going to the president of the United States because of the way the Electoral College is. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ad67b395b971,18658BB1E5FF,This voting process helps avoid a lot of bad things too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be81b79fd40f,18658BB1E5FF,There are so many good reasons why we should keep this form of voting ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c0f3013795c0,18658BB1E5FF,Avoiding Run-Off Elections is one good reason why we should keep the Electoral College ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6ec535565595,18658BB1E5FF,"according to ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President."" It states that, ""The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes."" This is good because they keep one of the presidents that got the majority of the votes to win automatically,instead they have to do some math to see who the winner is."" In the first writing ""What Is the Electoral College?"" by the Office of the Federal Register. This writing says that ""Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate."" This is basically saying that everyone gets to go the presidential election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f79faac8ee9,18658BB1E5FF,Some more key points are some more notes in the first and last writing. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e9fb21a32b8a,18658BB1E5FF,"In the writing ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President."" and it states, ""The Electotoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution..."" This is saying that go by a different rule of voting because of the population being than other states ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c9057d90cdd,18658BB1E5FF,"Another good point is in the first paragraph again and it says ""The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November."" This is good that you have a schedual for for the next voting this gives us enough time to vote, it also gives the time to see if the president is good or not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+399dfe8adc76,18658BB1E5FF,There is some downsides to this little thing you have going on here though. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+073d6903aa9e,18658BB1E5FF,"That is in the second paragraph and it really gets my attention, ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" With this in mind it is telling us the people that we are not voting for the president at all that is what most people believe that they are doing so you are kind of lying to some of them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7070b665f8d7,18658BB1E5FF,To wrap things up I am telling you that your Electoral College system is great in most ways ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+df2b0be7344a,18860E0DA892,We should be able to keep the Electoral College because it hasn't caused any harm when it comes to electing president or vice president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40fc980891a8,18860E0DA892,"As stated in the article, ""The Electoral College is a provess, not a place."" It's a compromise between the election of the president voted by congress and the citizens.""
+
+The Electoral College is where meetings are held to establish who our Presidents and Vice presidents are. As stated in the article, ""The Electoral College has 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President.""
+
+Each candidate that want to be President that's running in one's state has their own group electors, as stated in the article. ""The electors are generally picked by the candidates political party, state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3c3911f25af8,18860E0DA892,WE should be able to keep the loft because it has a definite outcome when our president is elected ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15f7ce94f1ec,18860E0DA892,"According to the article, they're five good reasons why we should keep the Electoral College. ""1) certainty of outcome, 2)eveyone's President, 3)Swing states, 4)Big states, 5) avoid Run-Off Elections. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44fd26392b71,18860E0DA892,"In conclusion, I believe that we should keep the Electoral College because of the positive affects i think it has when electing Presidents.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f5ab9403d92d,18AC57CFB338,"Have you ever woken up in the morning and wished you could just stay in bed? Many students probably experience this on a daily basis. Luckily, with the advent of computers and the internet, you may not need to leave bed to go to school at all. Many schools already use computers to allow students to work on and turn in assignments online. However, some schools now allow their students to attend their classes online as well. The benefits of this option are significant and numerous. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ded6523dd9cd,18AC57CFB338,Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+72d240383c4a,18AC57CFB338,"they could attend classes under conditions that would normally prevent them from doing so, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2c9e2c3ed026,18AC57CFB338,"learn in a more comfortable environment, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ac2b1602228,18AC57CFB338,reap the benefits of a more logistically efficient system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+54fa9dac46f1,18AC57CFB338,"Firstly, the option of online classes would allow students to attend classes despite conditions that would normally prevent them from doing so. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+25c097685758,18AC57CFB338,"For example, during winter, schools across the nation often close because of hazardous weather conditions that make it too dangerous to travel to school. However, with online classes, students could simply be instructed online, avoiding many missed days of valuable learning. This system would also take pressure off of school systems to keep schools open on days with questionably dangerous weather. Without worrying about missing yet another day of classes, schools could make the safe choice and close on more of these days. Additionally, it is common for students to stay home a few days when sick so that they can recover and avoid infecting their classmates. However, it is often the case that despite the risk of infecting classmates, students are still well enough to participate in class, but are unable to do so. With the option of online classes, these students could still participate without risking infection. A present day example of the possible utility of online classes is the Coronavirus outbreak. Many school systems worldwide have already shut down as a result of the virus. With online classes, these school systems could continue to instruct their students while also decreasing the risk of Coronavirus spreading. Overall, there are many situations in which online classes allow instruction to continue when not normally possible through traditional methods. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b4aea5d07675,18AC57CFB338,Another reason that students would benefit from online classes is that home can be a better learning environment than school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f0bde900427,18AC57CFB338,"In general, home is more comfortable than school for many kids. The ready access to food and a bathroom, as well as an environment that one is familiar with, means that many students would be more relaxed learning from home. With a lower stress level, students would likely be more productive and engaged in their classes. Additionally, some students can get stressed out over the classroom environment. Personally, I know that I have felt anxious in situations when I didn't know the answer to a question I was asked or when I had to read aloud. For me, and for many other students, attending classes from home would help to alleviate some of that stress and anxiety. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+939cd606a9a5,18AC57CFB338,Some may argue that taking classes from home would reduce students' level of focus. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0f0fd8c83e44,18AC57CFB338,"However, students already have to focus at home for homework. By having kids focus on a class at home, it would actually help reinforce their ability to focus and be disciplined in an environment in which they could be easily distracted, which is a useful life skill. Overall, in the more relaxed environment of home, students could be much more productive and successful in their classes than if they attended in person. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d807ed31bffd,18AC57CFB338,One more significant reason for providing the option of online classes is that they are much more logistically efficient than classes taught in person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec4dd0251604,18AC57CFB338,"Firstly, there is no travel time from home to the school. Additionally, transition time in between classes and time for lunch could be saved as well. This saved time could be put to various good uses. Classes could be lengthened, or another class could be added to students' schedules. Students could also get more sleep in the morning; many teenagers are chronically sleep deprived, so this would be a massive benefit. Students could also use the extra time to get a job. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca32e9604800,18AC57CFB338,One argument against online classes is that they would stop kids from learning to interact in person. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0b99596acb5d,18AC57CFB338,"However, the time saved through online classes would actually allow students to spend more time out with friends, which would teach them to get along with other people well. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bfab9704c734,18AC57CFB338,"Another benefit is that students could attend distant schools that would not be practical to attend in person. Besides the saved travel time, switching to more online classes would eliminate a great deal of paper waste, as many more assignments and materials would probably be online. This would benefit the environment, and it would keep students from having to keep track of both physical and digital assignments and documents. Finally, school systems could save money on a great deal of physical infrastructure, such as school buildings, classroom materials, and buses. The funds saved could be redirected towards giving students computers, paying teachers more, or investing in better learning resources. Overall, the saved time and money from switching to more online classes would significantly benefit students and teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56c1abc6b6e1,18AC57CFB338,"As technology advances, the classroom should advance as well. By embracing the opportunities created by technology, students can learn in ways never before possible and receive a higher quality education. Through more efficient use of time made possible by technology, students can spend more time having fun or earning money while still learning just as much. The online learning environment can make it easier for some students to get engaged in classes. The money saved because of online classes can be reallocated to improving students' education. These great benefits, among many others, demonstrate why online classes should be an option for every student. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+96b6f3145a53,18DD6D2A09F2,In community service it helps others think about what they need to do or want to do with their lives such as teaching little kids how to read or how to help other people out by taking out their garbage. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e913c51befd2,18DD6D2A09F2,"It is helping other people in your community / society that really need help. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d4e96e6e8b8,18DD6D2A09F2,When i was a little girl my brother always told me if you want something go for it never give up. As he told me go for my goal no body else's. At the time he was still living with us and he was in high school trying to become a doctor and he is now in collage trying to get his doctorate as i think you call them? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2501ed0382b6,18DD6D2A09F2,So when i think of community service i do not think of it as a job i think of it as a way of helping me understand more and helping other people with what they need in life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ecbb3a7df2d5,18DD6D2A09F2,Other teenagers might think that it is all fun and games ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a70bf3901f72,18DD6D2A09F2,to me it would be about finding myself and finding who i want to be. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1a4cd1892e71,18DD6D2A09F2,Never making it just a job. Its work that is always worth it in the long run. Never give up and never bale out on something. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+083975f43caa,18DD6D2A09F2,If your mind is set on it then most likely your going to succeed. It never hurts to try to do something that you believe in. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2bbee2b9d87d,18DD6D2A09F2,When i was in kinder garden my teacher asked me ''STUDENT_NAME what do you want to be when you get older?'' And i answered ... ''TEACHER_NAME i would like to be a veterinarian.'' But now if i got asked that same question i would most likely say '' I want to be a life changer.'' ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7c3140462870,18DD6D2A09F2,"Community Service helps young people find who they should be never just say i have better things to do with my time, Because you do not. What you want to go play or text on the phone .... well that's not going to help you in the long run now is it? Community service should be in every young persons life. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a284d685141a,18EAB669FDE2,Electoral college is a huge part of history we've used electoral college for many many years ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+93f6a5efd469,18EAB669FDE2,getting rid of it now would be wrong ,Position,Adequate,,,
+07683e3cc45d,18EAB669FDE2,we would have cheated every president that was elected during the time of electoral college ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+881a5a099623,18EAB669FDE2,people who have voted for many years would have to learn about this new voting system ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0a94087f78e5,18EAB669FDE2,every thing we've worked so hard to achieve will be changed. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ebc1805abe91,18EAB669FDE2,First off if electoral college was to be replaced it wouldn't be fair to all the presidents elected before it was replaced because they would feel like they were cheated because the new voting system would have been used for other presidents but not them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc4e72fa6742,18EAB669FDE2,Getting rid of the old way of voting would be like ripping up the constitution because were changing the one thing they wanted most a fair way for all presidents to be elected. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+52e0ad5b2a5b,18EAB669FDE2,As well as my first reason people who have been voting since they were 18 would have to learn how to use this new voting system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a87c1420e58,18EAB669FDE2,Replacing the electoral college would be catastrofic to those who have used it in the past because all thy know is how to use the electoral college so a new voting system would be like alien technology because all they know how to use is the old way of voting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aece3c4bfe35,18EAB669FDE2,Also everything we've worked so hard to achieve will be changed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fec2e043c4f1,18EAB669FDE2,In the past the former senaters fought over how a president should be elected president so evreryone argued and argued for days on end because the couldn't decide then they came up with the electoral college. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08e3a564f898,18EAB669FDE2,"So in conclusion replacing the electoral college would be unfair to former presidents, unfirmilaur to people who have used the electoral college, and and everything we've achieved would be changed.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2f2b43d96c62,1934C9CFDA72,Do you honestly believe that aliens created the Face ? Twenty five years ago spacecraft was snapping photos of landsites and spotted a shadowy likeness of a humans face. A Mesa ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+173bd72400b9,1934C9CFDA72,"First, they saw an enormous head which seemed to be staring back at the cameras from the Red Planet called Cydonia. When seen by Mission Controllers, they let off shockness. Shortly after the surprise the sensation was long gone. Few days later, the Nasa invielded the image. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d8ebcb6884b,1934C9CFDA72,"The caption said "" huge rock formation"". This resembled a human head formed by shadows with the illison of eyes, mouth, and a nose. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c50e149d57d3,1934C9CFDA72,"Next, Authors reasoned these images would be a great way to engage Mars and the other people; it did. The ""face of mars' became a huge icon for twenty five years. Soon it dtarred in films, was seen in books and magizines and most favored in grocery store lines. Photographing Cydonia beame a priorty for Nasa when MGS, Mars Global Surveyor arrived agian in September of 1997 which was a long eighteen years after. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef0c5e17db11,1934C9CFDA72,"Then, April 5, 1998, MGS traveled over Cydonia for the first time. They met Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camer team (MOC) snapped a picture ten times better the the original Viking picture tooking. There were thousands of anxios and very curious web surfers waiting to see tghe amazing phoyo revealing a natural landform , there was no alien monument. Aliens didn't create the image illison. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5da24deac661,1934C9CFDA72,"As rule thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger the the origianl size so if there were other objects, you would be able to see them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f205ede6df5,1934C9CFDA72,what the pcture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or a messa which are landforms around the American West. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+674eb6bbb96f,193B0EE3BF45,"
+Community service should not be required by all students. Although community service is a wonderful thing, service should never be forced ",Position,Effective,,,
+498838cab6bc,193B0EE3BF45,I think it shouldn't be required because when students are required to do something they usually don't want to do it ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4eb8ea054f84,193B0EE3BF45,and because maybe someone's life really is too busy for it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e49af9dc03f,193B0EE3BF45,"When you are serving others you are doing it to be kind, but if you had no option then you're doing it for no reason. People are always grateful when others serve them but most of the time they aren't as thankful if they know that serving them wasn't the persons option, and had they been given a choice they probably wouldn't have done it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7467e2bb7f6,193B0EE3BF45,Teenagers don't like it when they are told what to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ed944ae4a58,193B0EE3BF45,"It's a rebellious stage of life when they think they can do whatever pleases them. So naturally if someone tells them that they absolutely must do something, they automatically think no way. If they have an attitude like this it will ruin the experience and they won't get the good feeling people do when you serve others. They might dislike it so much that they don't even do service when they're grown up. They resent people that tell them they have to do something, and then they are ornery towards everyone else afterwards. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a24a70ac3b94,193B0EE3BF45,"If they had lots of little siblings and both their parents were at work all day, then they would have to watch them and they would never find time to do things such as community service. Also someone that doesn't excel in school but wanted to get a scholarship would probably have to be working very hard almost all day to get good enough grades. And if someone knew they had no chance at getting a scholarship, but still wanted to go to college would have to be working hard in school and they would need a job so they would be able to pay for all the expenses of college. Another example would be someone that isn't good in school but is very talented in sports. They would want to be doing their sport so that they could be good enough to get an athletic scholarship. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a0be34023734,193B0EE3BF45,"Therefore community service should be recommended to students, not required because when people serve they should do it willingly, and if they don't they won't have a good attitude about it. Teenagers have a mind of their own so being told what to do bothers them to the point of them never doing it again, and some peoples life may be full of various activities already so they simply don't have the time for it. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a44f1aa31ed7,193FCB88CF06,I think we should keep the Electoral College because it gives the people opportunities to vote for electors and presidents ,Position,Effective,,,
+b86fb2257404,193FCB88CF06,If we vote for popular votes then that doesnt mean people truly know what president they want to run their country. When we vote we are actually choosing our electors when we vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae5cb0d3ec5a,193FCB88CF06,Some people think that the Electoral College was unfair back-then ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9870a8ac6eb8,193FCB88CF06,but what about now ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1ed3fbb25c9f,193FCB88CF06,"Over seventeen sates did not see the candidates at all,Including Rhode Island and South Carolina. When you vote for a presidental candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b475d0dd67b,193FCB88CF06,"here are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College. One reason is certainty of outcome,Two Everyone's President, Three Swing States, Four Big States, and yet but not least Five Avoid Run-Off Elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5ad5289072f,193FCB88CF06,"These are all practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Electoral College requires a presidental candidate to have trans-regional appeal. Voters are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average and for the further reason that they will have received the most information and attention from the candidates, and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efc85f908ef5,193FCB88CF06,"Now in my case that is wrong because wether you vote or not everyone person should have the right to see what the president is doing to their country. So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidental candidates in a campaign than a small state does. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1540be1f1bb8,193FCB88CF06,"There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidental election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner. It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-democrats in Texas, for example,or Republicans in California. Each party selects a slate os electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed. The Electoral College is widely regarded as an person or thing in the past that cannot fit in the present. A non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.                                                                                   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42032f6c44c0,196782208035,Driverless cars would be good in the future because nobody would have to spend money on cars when they can actually buy other thing that they need. The driverless cars would use half fuel today's taxis need. Which is going to make people save money. The driverless car would offer far more flexibility than a bus. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+ffbeb8b33b71,196782208035,"The driverless cars could change the world in a positive way. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+5c38df427d7c,196782208035,Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half million miles without crashing. People would be so curious about the cars that they would love to try them. People is getting to discover more and more technology which is fascinating stuff and a driverless car would be a surprise for them and they would like to know about it. A driverless car is something that television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69bdc6e8d791,196782208035,A driverless car could be a benefit for a lot of people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+775fbca2e90a,196782208035,"People been trying to make a driverless car since the 1950's. They couldn't developed because it was just too expensive. Now that the world have advance a lot in technology is the time to start making new stuff in the world. If a company would dare to do this is going to change the history of the world and it would be in history forever.
+
+Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car Project, believes that the technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream. There was no way that they could make a car like this before 2000 because they didn't have all the technology that we have today. The radar it was just too expensive.
+
+The radar cost it was two hundred million dollars. If the companies now have all this technology around them why not make the driverless car. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+edfe2e15dae1,196782208035,the driverless car is something that a lot of people wants to see in the future. It would make the people life easier. The driverless car would make history. The driverless car would amaze people everywhere. If it happens is going to be history.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85743ad1836d,19AE5A267720,"I would like the
+
+Eletoral college to change, to let the people vote not the congress pick any president he wants ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1e926d28ed38,19AE5A267720,"I get that theres going to be fights and drama but still the people has to have the rigth to vote for who they want. I would like to vote too but not for someone to get to pick whatever president he wants. Think of the people, what if you were the people and you wanted to pick your self as president but the congress picks another president just because hes close to winning like you. Were in the United States a place of freedom so let the people vote and let them be free. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99b4c045744a,19AE5A267720,"I think that the
+
+Electoral college should omly have one elector. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+263b43dbc5a6,19AE5A267720,Why? because there will be less fights and arguments it will be all up to one elector to pick a president plus all the people that voted. I think it should be a llitle diffrent the elector should vote like a regular person but hes vote costs 500 votes so it will be half fair and helps the president he wants a little. The bad things are that people wouldn't think it's fair and the elector will have alot of pressure. The good things is that there wont be arguments or fights and thats what its all about.            ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b8a13529c6c,19AEDCFA6EF1,"I trying to understand why we have the system of choosing our state's electors when you vote for president beacuse when you vote for your candidant you are actualy voting for your candidante's electors. This process is easier for most individuals beacause you do not have to sit in a room, for hours, counting up millions of votes; all you have to do is count up the elector's votes in stead. This process is what our founding fathers established in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. How can you be a qualified citizen, arent we all the same? I know that the electoral college consists of 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. So, another thing that I would like to know is do you believe that this process that has been going on for ages is still a acturate system. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+25e3f7b55fd4,19AEDCFA6EF1,"Does it not seem a bit ludacris that you have to choose your state electors in order for your vote to be counted since you think that who you pick as the electors will actually pick the vote you wanted. Why cant we vote for our won presient, why should we have to go through someone to vote for our president. It has been known that president's may be the popular vote winner, but still can lose the presidency. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e19763b9ca16,19AEDCFA6EF1,Individuals that vote on their electors can not always control who their electors choose for president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33a060137dbd,19AEDCFA6EF1,"Some of these candidates that people choose are what you call ""faithless"" electors because of the winner-takes-all system. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+886e6203d687,19AEDCFA6EF1,"This means that most candidates do not spend time in states they know that they have no chance of winning. Meaning, they only stay focused on the ""swing"" states which in other words means the states that will either go for the person they like or against him. During the 2000 campaign, 17 state had not even seen their candidates at all and the voters in 25 of the largest media markets did not get to see a single campaign ad. So, tell me why we are still using this same system that cheats citizens out of their votes. Is it beacuse we are not qualified citizens? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b56f34423adb,19AEDCFA6EF1,"If you do not already know by now the electoral college is a process, not a place and this process needs to be abolished. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dca0cbbc9525,19AEDCFA6EF1,"Who picks these electors, are they just people like you and I or are they the qualified citizens. They can be anyone not holding an office and the state actually chooses the electors. So, this means that the people really have no place in the president election. The electors are chosen by the state and even if you choose those electors they can go against what you decide and choose who ever they want. What happened to what the people wanted, why are those candidates choosing who runs our country for four years. What did they do so amazing that they get the final say on the matter. No, they are like us so why should we have to go through them just so we can make sure are vote matters in electing the president. Most of America has to deal with making sure are kids are getting a good eduacation, making sure are water or light bill is paid every month, and we also have deal with getting up at seven in the morning working and not coming home untill eleven at night all the while praying that our kids are safe since we could not pay for a nanny. With all of these things worrying us, putting a lot of stress in our minds one of the only things that we should not have to worry about is if our vote is going to count in electing our president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20fc88dc9ae2,19AEDCFA6EF1,"In conclusion, I believe, senator, that we should change our election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America.                    ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0357a9d16a62,19D014A29353,I feel community service is important. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+68bdceef68ed,19D014A29353,"I feel community service is important because giving back to your community your family, neighbors and friends is the best thing you can do to make strong powerful relationships with your family ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2928f7fb3491,19D014A29353,"principle, i think students should have to do community service, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+41ead0b55d63,19D014A29353,"i remember one time i got in trouble in school i had to do it i thought it was going to be terrible but after all it really wasn't that bad, i mean it was hard and long but all that worked paid off after it was over my teacher acted like it never did anything wrong because he knew i wasn't that type of child. If i never did my community service i would of have never gotten my respect back for only doing one thing wrong and if you don't have a good relationship with your teacher you will miss out on a lot of fun stuff while your class mates are having all the fun ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dacbadbd0eb2,19D014A29353,The community service wouldn't be what all my classmates thought about it would take place after school like a program you would go around with your friendly class mates in groups pick up trash that your find around your community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41c5431595a3,19D014A29353,I would think of this program as a privilege instead of a horrible thing. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8f7edacfdff4,19EFA4F36E68,I think there should be a little changes like they need more meetings to choose there president and the vice president how many votes are in to choose there president. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+474e584d58d0,19EFA4F36E68,"they need about 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes for our president. The electors equals the number of memebers in congressional delegation. Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for pureposes of the elctoral college. any of our candidates run for our president. It runs how they act and how they are with the people that they have. The presidential election are every four years. The winner takes all and be's the new president. Our governer talk to us like a big long speech. They do a recoding of the new president. The electoral college, they're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after every thing. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election. This year voters can expect another close election.  Voters vote not just for there president, but for a slate of electors. The people would have to vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors. The american people are lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest ellection. The voting takes place in the House of Representative and that are we vote for the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+569676514bd8,1A25F592A8B1,I feel that electoral college should stay becuase it set's straight the manege for the peoples votes for the president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7fb74b098dcf,1A25F592A8B1,"Even thow if a tie the election would be thrown to the house of represenatives were they decide on the new president. The electoral college is a process its not a place. It shows that the founding fathers established it for the compromise between elections between the president by a vote in congress. The electoral college consists of 538 electors. Plus a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president .It say's in the passage that under the 23rd Amendment of the constiton that the district of colombia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for the purposes of electoral college. On many cases 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election. The electoral college system states that voters vote not for the president,but for a state of eletors who elect the president. I think that they should have the right to elect the president that would make this nation grow stonger not to make mistakes and lead us to problems which they can decide to choose the future of the united states. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff0910951125,1A25F592A8B1,"Many people have diffrent opinions as me but not all will get the same results as they wanted. The effects of the electoral college has been giving us positive values. As we live on since back of the elections day we are still here becuase of thow,s elections it made us who we are american citizions of the USA.History depends on the future rights of the president thats why the electoral college is there to help make that happen.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e3ddd93221fc,1A31F3084DC0,I hear you are trying to make a decision on whether all students should be required to perform community service. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+163e056aa627,1A31F3084DC0,Well i disagree with students having to perform community to service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+366b61eeef0a,1A31F3084DC0,some students have more important or something that they need to accomplish but if they are doing community service they wont be able to. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+41a3b8ff3d4f,1A31F3084DC0,"Community service is very important, i think it is important because with out our communities we wouldn't have anyplace to live. I think that it is important to keep the community you live in clean because it is your community, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3541513c4a7e,1A31F3084DC0,"However i do not agree with students must or be forced to do community service, i think it should be a self choice on whether they want to do community service or not. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f70717a8a9ab,1A31F3084DC0,"Students have a lot of things on their plate outside and inside school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7951c5543324,1A31F3084DC0,"some may have extra curricular activities they have to stay faithful to, assignments from teachers that have to be completed, some may even have a job they have to attend. So it would be hard for them to do all of these things and perform community service at the same time because they would have no free time in between and it would be hard to juggle all these things at once it would be very stressful on that person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40de7717fddd,1A31F3084DC0,Another reason why i disagree with students having to do community service is because it will distract the students from focussing on what they have to do or want to ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2dacc77944c6,1A31F3084DC0,Community service i think is a dedication and once you start you have to commit to whatever type of community service the person is doing and with all the things that some students have to do they cannot be fully committed to doing community service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5b0a2f9d7d5,1A31F3084DC0,"In conclusion i disagree with students having to perform community service. It is hard for a student to complete all the things that they need to and do community service, i think whenever a student has free time they should use their time on something they really want to do or need to because students have a lot to deal with and they deserve every minute of free time they get and shouldn't waste it all the time on community service . ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+de9f87b81822,1A5D1D1C4F14,"While humanity is doing just fine with how we use cars now,driverless cars are apart of our not too distant future. Personally,I'm neutral in this argument but if this new way of using our vehicles advances our humanity I'm all for it. People these days are reckless when it comes to driving and so maybe a car that does the driving will in a way stop all the accidents and reckless driving. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3fde671a4607,1A5D1D1C4F14,Driverless cars could reduce hit and runs ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99bfb7a4850f,1A5D1D1C4F14,drivers are still needed in certain situations. What's the point of driverless cars if there's still a need for a driver. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+02942464557b,1A5D1D1C4F14,Driverless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer better transportation than a bus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05db2b4d3ee8,1A5D1D1C4F14,These cars could possibly change the world and advance technology. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4d64019cb7c,1A5D1D1C4F14,"These advanced cars are amazing but are exspensive and a bit of a risk. None of the cars are completely driverless. These cars can steer,accelerate,and brake,but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. So like navigating through work zones or around accidents. The driver must stay alert and ready to take over when the time comes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7e14f295c86,1A5D1D1C4F14,This is what I mean when I say what's the point of driverless cars if we're still basically driving the car. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a16d5d80a1fc,1A5D1D1C4F14,I do like how Gm has developed the driver's seat to vibrate when the car is in danger of backing into an object because of my personal experience with backing my first car into a fire hydrent. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b1525c84423b,1A5D1D1C4F14,"Manufacturers are considering adding cameras to most of the cars so the drivers are remaining focused ont eh road. While the driver watches the road,the car watches the driver. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf4e808df5cf,1A5D1D1C4F14,Humanity needs to experience new things and give this new way of driving a try. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fb669498544f,1A5D1D1C4F14,Driving laws focus more on safety. Traffic laws state that the only safe car there is has a human driver in control at all times. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+524911a7d338,1A5D1D1C4F14,"The future is looking very bright,the best has yet to come. Humanity is growing and advancing more and more everyday. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0cb388fc18ce,1ADE96A7A4D3,Have you ever wanted to just kick back and relax while your car does all of the driving? Have you ever thought about how dangerous that could be? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+807b8df69868,1ADE96A7A4D3,I believe that semi or fully autonomous cars are a danger to the world. ,Position,Effective,,,
+618f86857eed,1ADE96A7A4D3,"The cars are not not truly autonomous, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9d49037b217,1ADE96A7A4D3,"nobody can really tell where responsibility lies when the computer is in control, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+37d5832bf222,1ADE96A7A4D3,the technology that powers the cars may fail. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0df778f3c0b,1ADE96A7A4D3,"The cars we have today run off of a computer, until it hits conditions it can not handle, requireing the driver to take over. In 2013, BMW made a vehicle that could run the car on its own, but the driver still had to hold on to the wheel. Many other cars have become semi autonomous, but require the driver to take over when there are different conditions, such as roadwork or there is an accident. Some of these semi auatonomous cars alert the driver when they need to take over, either by an indicator, physical vibration, or simply by announcing that the driver needs to take over. What if the driver falls asleep and the car fails to wake the driver to take control of the car? How safe is the car then? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f0a69b990911,1ADE96A7A4D3,"The Google car for example, has sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a camera on the rearvier mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor. The car runs off of all of these sensors, and needs every single one of them to run properly. But what happens if one of these sensors reade untrue values because they have malfunctioned or got covered up by something. Technology can only go so far into our lives before we are putting human life at risk. All it takes is one failure, one moment where a sensor isn't working correctly , and a persons life could be over. The sensors also cost money. This would make many of these cars almost unbuyable to the general public because of the cost of parts and matenience. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9fc9cbd987ba,1ADE96A7A4D3,"Does the manufactorer who made the car get blamed, or does the driver who purchased it take responsibility? I personally belive that these cars are an assumed risk and that if the car is in an accident, that both the driver and the manufacterer are to blame. I believe that the driver could have attempted to do something to change the cars path, but it is more so the manuacturers fault becasue their car failed to stay in its own lane and out of the way of other traffic. The blame also depends on who was inc ontrol at the time of the accident, if the driver had control of the car, it is his or her fault. But if the computer was running the car, then it is the manufacturers fault. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0085664d9e90,1ADE96A7A4D3,"These cars are not truly on autopilot, the technology is not completely reliable, and who is to blame for an accident? These points are all good reasons as to why these cars are a hazard to human life and should not be on our roads. So before you get right behind the idea of an autonomous car, think ""do i trust my life and others lives to a machine?""  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e7e80a5a6df8,1B3701EE4951,I think that kids should be allowed to use cell phones during free time in school. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a2809b52b384,1B3701EE4951,"Cell phones provide a way of communicating with your parents and other people you need to talk to.
+
+If you forgot something or you need something for after school activities, you can just call your parents to bring the things you need to school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab10d6b670de,1B3701EE4951,"Also if there was a lock-in at school, you can call your parents to inform them that you're okay and everything is fine. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66bfd51e210e,1B3701EE4951,"In addition if you want to go to your friend's house and you need your parents to sign a slip to let you go on your friends bus, they can just bring it to school.
+
+When you are not feeling well and you feel the need to go home, you call your parents to let them know you are not feeling that well. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f47774339e0c,1B3701EE4951,"Although you can use the school's phone, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+27f0b0dabe2d,1B3701EE4951,"it is much easier for kids to just use their phones. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+113710a70fe9,1B3701EE4951,"We can still keep the rule of ""green zones"" and ""red zones"" for allowing phone use in the classroom. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb2eb93c3d65,1B3701EE4951,"
+If it is a ""green zone"", you are allowed to have your phone on and use it for any purposes, but if it is a ""red zone"", you are supposed to have your phone turned off or on silent in your pocket.
+
+But the teacher of the classroom is in control of the ""zones"".
+
+The teacher may let his/her students use cell phones during study center or for any activity their doing. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b7ac2d1eb41,1B3701EE4951,You can still keep the consequences of having your cell phone out during class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f1b82ead977,1B3701EE4951,"
+First time is giving the phone to your teacher until the end of class, second time is a call to your parents, and third time is a trip to your office with the student's parents. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66d9b690c96c,1B3701EE4951,"
+Cell phones are just a good way of communicating.
+
+I know that you can trust SCHOOL_NAME
+
+students about being responsible and to not take advantage of the cell phones.
+
+Please take the note of consideration of keeping cell phones in SCHOOL_NAME. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+228eaba46853,1B52BB98FACA,I think we shouldn't get community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8bad1789a709,1B52BB98FACA,maybe some people that thinks they are wasting there time should do it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+afb5bcc88f74,1B52BB98FACA,Us people that do want to do it should not do all day community service like the others. Also don` t punish the other people bad. They are just not helpful enough or just don't want to do nothing at all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+241c65189e31,1B52BB98FACA,"The people who think cleaning are environment is good they are so right and some people should learn from them. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3bdcdfcadc80,1B52BB98FACA,"Clean environment means more animals survive and healthy plants for everyone to enjoy. Some people just don't understand natures true beauty in life. All of them think its all electrical keep us alive will is not some of it maybe , but not all. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21d50c304b29,1B52BB98FACA,"So that's why we shouldn't get community service cause some people just don't understand about it. And just want to do fun stuff and play around with their friends, and play with all the electronic stuff. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+da3a0a91ae81,1B9A3BB7082E,"Dear, state senator i think that the elctoral collage should not be here anymore. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e2fc55d0d6ff,1B9A3BB7082E,"In source 2 the auther states that the voters vote not for the president,but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president. The problem with that is that the electors  can be anyone who is not holding public office. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cafef2ff73d8,1B9A3BB7082E,When i vote i would like to know who i was voting for not letting electors vote for me then they would just be wasting their own time.''Inthe same vein ''faithless'' electors heve occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and a cast a diciding vot for whom ever they please. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2b047b8fc80,1B9A3BB7082E,"Plus that winnier take all thing i really dont like because i like other people to have a chance to see what they say. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b1b5be8c00a6,1B9A3BB7082E,Perhaps in source 1 they have a winner take all system that awards all electors to the winning presidental canidate. The electoral collage is a prosses not a place. It was established by the founding fathers in which they put it in the  constitustion as a compromise. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c151e34817e6,1B9A3BB7082E,"By the way in source 3 the auther states that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the popular vote. There are five reasons for retaining the electoral collage despite its lack of democratic pedigree all are practical reasons ,not liberal or conservative reasons. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0a7a35986bf1,1B9A3BB7082E,The first reason is certainy of outcome. the second one is everyone's presidents. the third one is swing states. the fourth one is the big states. the fifth one is avoid run off elections. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f66a25fc0a5,1B9A3BB7082E,Soo yeah honestly you should listen to source number 2 he knows what he talking about so be smart choose wisely.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+542ff1d3e9e7,1B9CD4058350,I'm writing you this letter to discuss that we should keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+14df3eb6121e,1B9CD4058350,I think we should keep it because it's only a fair enough way of voting it is more consistant than others because if we voted by popular vote it wouldn't be much fair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+613e21c88dc2,1B9CD4058350,because as soon as most people found out there was a black president running they were against it the thought it was the worst idea ever. Instead of giving Mr. Obama the chance he deserved most people were against him. So if it wasn't for the Electoral College Mr. Barck Obama wouldn't have gotten the chance he deserved. Romeney also could've won but that's not the way Electoral College works when voting you are actually voting for a slate of electors and they chose the president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+711440179f01,1B9CD4058350,The electoral collage some people might call it unfair or a disaster factor because it's not the people chosing the president it's the electors. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1e3de19041b2,1B9CD4058350,The popular vote just chooses which person is more well liked not who people think will make the country a better place and so far no one is doing so. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c7027f4dde6c,1B9CD4058350,The Electoral college has a slate of trusted electors that has a certain party's nominee and the trust is rarely ever betrayed. Despite the Electoral College's lack of democratic process it's certainty of outcome is good as for example Obama's winning he received 61.7 percent of the elctoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of the popular vote. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77cf40f79059,1B9CD4058350,The Electoral College also should be kept because it prevents Run-Off Elections elections when no canidate receives majority of the votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7dee8038d25,1B9CD4058350,This why I think we should keep the Electoral College and not change over to the popular voting method.                                    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1febd979f3d8,1BCF061FF0FF,will kids should actually bring cell phones to school the reason ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+312823e2278e,1BCF061FF0FF,it takes kids education away and kids don't listen to what the teacher is saying ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32d5481d9088,1BCF061FF0FF,even though some kids still bring their cell phones and end up getting taking away ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39588653f30e,1BCF061FF0FF,the principal from others school don't let the kids bring cell phones but the kids still do they really don't listen. and they end up in trouble and cell phone taking away. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad882cd36329,1BCF061FF0FF,the kids that bring there cell phone to they can be in danger too like they can be talking with a stranger tell them to meet them after school or in some place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5dff65461e85,1BCF061FF0FF,kids could bring their cell phones too school but to have them off before entering there classes ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c76cebc520d9,1BCF061FF0FF,so they wont get there cell phone taking away or get in trouble or in danger kids need to stop bringing there cell phones to school and listen to what the teachers in school have to say. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12ac72ff1c22,1BCF061FF0FF,like if there is a test and the kids are texting how are they going to know about it when their not really listening to what she is saying. kids are not even suppose to have a cell phone its a policy if you have it or not its up too the parents. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8788a9eda957,1BCF061FF0FF,and plus kids bring their cell phones to school and they end up get stole or broke and the parents end up getting really mad at them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+316a168c7786,1BCF061FF0FF,"kids could text talk on the phone mostly after school not in school because we all come to learn not to really fool around. if kids keep on fooling around their is no education for them. in free times kids could use their phone it depends if the teachers let them. its not policy that you really have too use your phone like who are you going to chat with when your friends are right next too you. other times in school kids still use their phones and no one actually tells them anything . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+72d68678f6f3,1BCF061FF0FF,And why would principals even let kids bring their cell phones to school just putting their life in danger. And the kids are not getting full education ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7896c300ac7,1BCF061FF0FF,the one that they are going to need in life a cell phone can take off your mind off of the education just by a little text the at the kids can see after school nothing is going to happen too you if you don't see the text like right at that time. you have class at that time no free time or anything. you go to because your learning something that your going to need when you get older. with out you learning this skills what are you going to do in life nothing right. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05d85296d011,1BCF061FF0FF,Our school principal doesn't let us bring our cell phones to school and some kids do understand and other act like if they misunderstood ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15b705c0222e,1BCF061FF0FF,but once they get in trouble there would understand. some kids just need too stop texting during class get there work that their goanna need. and plus of course study for some big tests that may come out. and if kids are missing work why don't just do it? instead of texting or just fooling around school not doing anything. your life something that you need. skill what your going to use during your lifetime and college ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12bc286c2b9f,1BDC5F527974,Candidate what do you think of when I say that word well If I had to guess a said president. President that when  each party selects a president that the people  trust to help this Nation. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+391bdcd266b0,1BDC5F527974,"candidates focuse their campaign on efforts onthe toss up state. In the article they said Nixonin 1968 and Clintin in 1992 both had only a43 percent plurality of the popular votes. No c candidate win majority.
+
+Did you know that under 23rdAmendment of the constistution the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. That what the article told me in paragraph4. Every candidate that is running for president has his or her own group of electors. the majority of 270 electoral votes is rerequired to elect the president. Everyone has to vote if want somebody that own your side. If don't then your voice will never be heard so you have speak up and vote. For who should be president of the state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4aa6720ef830,1BDC5F527974,So voting is a big deal so you make sure that you be heard.         ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3199ddbe47b1,1BEB13D46E9D,I think the United States should keep the Elector College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c5f8c41059f3,1BEB13D46E9D,"because it consists the selection of the electors and the electors of where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of electoral votes by Congress. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. Majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Based under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. You can help choose your state's electors when you vote for President, when you vote for your candidate you're actually voting for your candidate's electors. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89a45910ce7a,1BEB13D46E9D,The best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3b9ddcf51933,1BEB13D46E9D,"Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for pickng electors and could always defy the will of people. Perhaps the most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. At some type of level, the electoral college is unfair to some voters. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of some swing voters in Ohio, they'll have to yet make it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2a5370052aa,1BEB13D46E9D,"The electoral college is outdated, irrational, unfair, and its official. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d00c25b90d85,1BEB13D46E9D,"Best arguments in favor of mostly assertions without much basis in reality. The electoral college is regarded as an anachronism. Anachronism is a person or thing that seems to belong in the past and not to fit in the present. Advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not a democratic in a modern sense, its the electors who elect the president, not us (people). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b153d9739769,1BEB13D46E9D,There is pressure for run-off elections when there's no candidate that can win majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cd74cf292045,1BEB13D46E9D,"No voters vote a nation election, also in that order about one-half the eligible American population did vote in 2012's election. The popular vote was in Florida. Other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than some other small states do. Almost some of the voters are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on a average type of level, and most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2e6123fb4148,1BEB13D46E9D,"There are five reasons for retainng the Electoral College, despite of it's lack of democratic pedigree. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6c08ab75117,1BEB13D46E9D,"Pedigree is the origin and history of something, when it is good or impressive. The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal. Electoral College restores some weight in the political balance that some of the large states lose by virtue of mal-apportionment of the Senate. The Electoral College avoid problems of elections in which no candidate receives majority of the votes. Sometimes it can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a type of candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. Some voters in presidential elections are people that want to express a political preference rather then people who's thinking a single vote may decide on an election.         ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+473e1ec7857b,1BF9AA238FCE,"W.E.B DuBois, the influential civil rights activist and co founder of the NAACP, valued education and believed that it was the most important thing in life. However, most students do not share the same beliefs nowadays. They dread going to school because they have to wake up early and rush to get to school on time. They wish to wake up on their own and get the day going at their own pace. When a student has to rush to shcool against theirt will, it can increase stress and reduce productivity. This can be a huge obstacle in the path of their education. Some schools offer distance learning, which allows students to take classes at home through online or video conferencing ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0c13d15f1f09,1BF9AA238FCE,Taking classes online and at home is extremely beneficial for a student's learning ,Position,Effective,,,
+ed87c6b190ec,1BF9AA238FCE,because it can help avoid illness ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6920a446635c,1BF9AA238FCE,"and it is a more comfortable environment, thus increasing productivity. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b02a2de8be09,1BF9AA238FCE,"However, it is likely that students will take advantage of this feature in a negative way. The lack of commitment to the online learning can decrease their will to learn. They can skip class and not get anything done at home. In addition, there is a lot of room for malfunctions in the technology. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4673cfe544d3,1BF9AA238FCE,"If there is no one available in person to help with these issues, online classes become useless. Yet, these factors play a crucial role in the student's development as a person. They teach the student discipline and time management. When a student skips an online class, the teacher will be able to know and punish them accordingly, whether it is lowering their grade or contacting their parents. This teaches the student not to skip classes. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e2ac975638b3,1BF9AA238FCE,"Technology issues are unpredictable but are not a complete obstruction to the student's learning. Due to the introduction of the cloud, all their work and progress can be saved online and transferred to another device. The student can contact their teacher and let them know about the issues. This saves a lot of time in the long run. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d83629180599,1BF9AA238FCE,"Everyone, including me, has experienced a sickness, and chances are, they probably got it from someone at school. It is extremely easy for sicknesses and diseases to be transferred around in school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5cf7e6266198,1BF9AA238FCE,"This causes the student to stay home sick and not get any work done. This can be avoided by introducing distance learning. A huge and current example of this is COVAD-19, the coronavirus. It is massive pandemic that is shocking everyone around the world. There are thousands of deaths and cases worldwide. School systems, such as Generic_School Counties, are discussing the possibility of closing school and shifting classes to online to prevent the transfer of this deadly disease. This is a very smart decision because it slows down the spreading of the coronavirus in our area and it keeps the students and their families safe. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7b4e5dff9bbe,1BF9AA238FCE,A more comfortable environment allows students to feel safe and makes work a little more relaxed and stress free. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6d9b83fc76d4,1BF9AA238FCE,"When students are more relaxed and comfortable, they are more efficient and productive with their work. They face less pressure from other students and teachers. It makes their work more accurate. In addition, by finishing their work and online classes, they have more time to do what they want and relax. This serves as a motivation for the students to be as productive as possible. Online classes are far less time consuming because you don't have to go anywhere. You can simply wake up, open your device, and start learning; whereas if you're going to school, you have to get ready, travel to school, and sit bored in class wishing to go home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9296c0ceffc7,1BF9AA238FCE,Offering distance learning through online classes and video conferencing can help a lot in a student's path of education because it keeps them safe from breakout diseases and increases their productivity by making them more comfortable. The students face far less stress at home than they do at home. This results in a spike of productivity and even makes their grades better. Online classes should definitely be introduced to more schools because it is a really useful tool in helping the student become a better learner and person by teaching discipline and time management skills. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+40ca35a11863,1C088E6CD17E,"As society becomes more reliant on technological advances, many individuals are now granted the opportunity to take online classes at home. Essentially, school systems have modernized their methods of providing various approaches towards an efficient education ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9f197ec44fbc,1C088E6CD17E,"Although virtual learning provides a more personalized learning experience for students, the consequences of implementing online classes outweigh the benefits. ",Position,Effective,,,
+95e92b086348,1C088E6CD17E,Online classes can hinder the development of social skills within individuals ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e9aebb97563,1C088E6CD17E,"The classroom setting and environment offers students a wide variety of ways to exercise their social skills and develop character by interacting with different individuals. For an example, many individuals who are confined inside their homes are unable to participate in healthy activities that involve engaging with other students such as sports, clubs, organizations, and other extracurricular activities. Oftentimes, the individual who finds themselves being accustomed to this way of learning have identified themselves as ""anti-social"" or socially awkward. This is due to the fact that they prefer to isolate themselves from group settings or from social events because they are apprehensive and, sometimes even, hostile towards others who attempt to change their habits ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b6a10e952c1,1C088E6CD17E,Some may argue that online classes have the ability to engage its students with insightful discussions with their teacher and peers online. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b3bbe8c369fc,1C088E6CD17E,"However, physical presence plays a vital role in developing relationships and allowing students to overcome their social anxiety. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+f20e868225d1,1C088E6CD17E,"Like any technological application, individuals typically use online platforms and sites to display a persona and in this case, online classes encourages these students to strengthen their online presence, but not their physical one. In terms of longevity, this method does not strengthen crucial life and work skills that they are expected to have when they join the workforce; it is simply unrealistic. These students are encouraged to hide behind a screen because they lack social skills, and they justify this practice because the education system glamorizes the idea of their innovative society. Overall, online classes not only affect their learning experience, but their social skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf0e0973c6a2,1C088E6CD17E,"Furthermore, online classes are not preparing individuals to face the reality of the workforce and the legitimacy of this method is ambiguous. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f30001c25287,1C088E6CD17E,"The whole purpose of providing the youth with education is to be able to train them to become independent enough to be self-sufficient in the real world. In a school or classroom environment, they learn valuable teamwork skills that allow them to cooperate and collaborate with other individuals about how to approach an issue, overcome challenges, and propose a solution. This eventually leads to the building of bonds and relationships that could impact an individual's life or mental health, whereas online schooling encourages the opposite effect of this. By physically going to school, these individuals nurture their abilities to be problem-solvers and natural thinkers. Additionally, some students may not take online classes seriously as opposed to physically showing up for class. For an example, online students may not require a time constraint and does not require the students to be properly dressed for the ""class."" Sometimes, the individual may present themselves to an online class in their pajamas because they woke up an hour ago. This does not exemplify sophistication nor does the class seem respected. On the other hand, if the student were to show up to school, they would look much more prepared and willing to learn. This highlights the difference between individuals who value their education and the ones who do not. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+258bc4202e9d,1C088E6CD17E,"Lastly, online schooling does not account for individuals with learning disabilities ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac3b7d3caa9a,1C088E6CD17E,"Most schools consist of people from various races, ethnicities, backgrounds, sexes, and learning capabilities. Not every student thinks the same way, so they should be encouraged to express their creativity to establish a diverse school setting. Additionally, some students may possess specific learning disabilities such as ADHD, dyslexia, autism, mental illnesses, and more. In this case, these students require much more attention from their teachers to help guide them through this process, but an online class can only do so much. The teachers may be going at a faster pace than what these students can normally handle or they are confused about a certain area of the subject, so their frustrations may build up and lead to detrimental effects on their mental health. Although it is considered to be personalized learning, these individuals require careful guidance towards achieving the same success that their counterparts are experiencing. In the sense of virtual learning, these individuals are at a disadvantage because their learning disabilities are beyond their control. Video conferencing may be an option, but students with learning disabilities prefer not to share with their peers that they are struggling in a certain area or having difficulties understanding the curriculum, but would much rather keep this information confidential between themselves and their teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7004d71c22d5,1C088E6CD17E,"By implementing online classes, schools should reassess the validity of its efficiency and the impact it will have on students. Virtual learning can have benefits, but is effective to a certain extent. Ultimately, the negative imbalance between the consequences and benefits of virtual learning suggests that online classes should not be encouraged within school systems and to continue to maintain a traditional form of education.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+94b8c5723488,1C3A41A2CE86,"Well I think that the electoral college should stay because, its much easier then just picking a person to run the united states. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bb448a4a42c7,1C3A41A2CE86,"The first reason is because, all you need to get is 270 votes just to win the whole thing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8472f2ab9c83,1C3A41A2CE86,"Also the winner take all deal is when the person with the most vote would take the others votes beacsue that person dont have all of the votes, so the person with the most votes would take all of the votes. This is from passage Dose the electoral college work? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eeeb2ddbf814,1C3A41A2CE86,"And the electoral college was founed by the founding fathers, so we know that this thing is really good to use. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dcce976a8e08,1C3A41A2CE86,"The things that are wrong with use the electoral college is that is the person gets their votes for thir state the might just win because, the more the people that live there more of the votes that they might get. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6e194b5ddb74,1C3A41A2CE86,Pluse that shoulldnt be right beacsue that person knows everyone that lives in the town and they might not know that the other person is way much better then the person that  they knew for many years. Also most people thing the electoral college is un fair beacsue it doesnt really give you the right things and the peple might be force to chose the wrong person beaucsue they knew that person for many years but the dont nothing about the other person.            ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c0c389d02d1,1C54A8400984,I think it should be  the most votes each president because it should be majority rule ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0c91fc2717cc,1C54A8400984,if many people pick one president and the other only gets a couple the one with the most should win because the peoples voice should choose who is over them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f64e7cd2a1d0,1C54A8400984,Also because if everyone vote for this one president there electoral college can still vote for the opposite of them and go against the ones that want to vote for that particular president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9efecddc7e17,1C54A8400984,The electoral college vote is unfair to some people because they only have like a 50 percent chance to get the president they want in the white house. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6754ebc89276,1C54A8400984,"If the congress or whoever was to abolish the electoral congress vote I think we would see numerous of changes in our past history and our future, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0b0be8664297,1C54A8400984,"so in the end it is basically like all of our votes are going to be voting vor the electoral votes then it goes to the president voting. After so long many people are going to stop voting, but not all because some people like it this way. the reason to that is because so many people are going to pay attention to their votes not being counted to the presidents voting stand. And since they know their vote is not being counted many people are going to stop voting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a980c0dc7903,1C638282627C,I disagree on this article ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+37f152b9e539,1C638282627C,"well im in between to story i believe it is going to be like that in the future but also it might not because there going to upgrade the cars or whatever so imma have to say i disagree. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1ce12c3f7cde,1C638282627C,the reason i disagree is that there going to be better cars than what they is now they just going to keep coming out with new stuff and everything. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+95c085551068,1C638282627C,"In the future future like 2032 type stuff like that i really dont know cause i dont even know if im still ognig to be living at that time. Yeah they coming out with new cars yes people are still ging to be driving even if the car is old or new you still going to do something.
+
+I mean none is going to walk i know im not but some people might have to of take the bus because they dont have a car or some like that btu other than people is still going to drive and so will i Then again i really dont know if im still going to be here to see it but i still say no people love driving i do i mean i really be really angry if school take away cars like people will be mad and complain becayse thats how they get to places thats how i get to places.
+
+And if u dont have a car you can take a bus our a taxes but a taxes is considered a car to so a train fly and airplane. My final answer is disagree because thats not going to hapened my predition to the world when it becmoes the future if i live to see it. Really the point of this article is would cars still be in the future the article is saying no its not but i really believe yes it would be but to be honest we really would know until we actually seen it for ourself but i mean if they gone take cars away in the that mean they should of been took it this years ago like they would ask use thing in 2012 but its 2016 and cars are still here and going to stay here not thay long like 2045 type stuff if i live to see that year i would be 45. They say that most most driving laws focusing on is keeping driver,passengers and pedestians safe i really dont believe that because if you guys was reakky thinking about that you wouldnt be say you gonig to as if cars are still going to be here in the future.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5ad227412eee,1C6B45AF8116,yes I think students should be required to community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+067b7a2ac614,1C6B45AF8116,because if they do they would be helping the community a lot ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ccae6940484,1C6B45AF8116,and it could teach people how to start caring more about there community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ae9b0259ebe,1C6B45AF8116,and probably do some community service there self. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f126013866a8,1C6B45AF8116,students can make a difference in there community they just need somebody to show them how to do it ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0dca01ae6f28,1C6B45AF8116,another reason why i think students should be required to do community service is for bad behavior or vandalize school property and so they can learn that things like that won't help get the community better it will just make it worse. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+503591e8dede,1C6B45AF8116,"another reason is that it would help the men and women who have to clean and pick up trash every day. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d4a9ab2b0cc,1C6B45AF8116,if we don't recycle and pick up trash it will make the community worse to and if you have a bad community then you have a bad city a bad county and a bad state and a bad environment so it would help if students would take some time out and volunteer to do community service to help the planet. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4084636a4aa4,1C7FDCD3337C,"What do you think about descarding electorial voting?,do you feel that it would be best to keep it this way,or do you think there should be a change? What you think i dont know. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a46ee72d4dd6,1C7FDCD3337C,i recomend that the electorial voting should not be changed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9663fd8759c6,1C7FDCD3337C,"One of my main reasons for this is electorial voting has mostlikely been going on for decades,and why would you deside to change this now ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ceb871ab82d,1C7FDCD3337C,"This act could possibly throw some important things off track. For example if you were to go fourth with this act you could possibly risk people selecting the wrong president and his electors,which then could risk people to lose there jobs,homes,end up homeless,etc this could be avoided if you keep things how they are and not end up messing things up changing electoral voting. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0090738a2ef1,1C7FDCD3337C,"Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,and Bob Dole feel differently with my reason,they all feel that you should abolishe the electoral voting,they thaat sence Al Gore lost the presedency but won the popular vote they think that people are being cheated out of there vote and its not fair. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2004911e229c,1C7FDCD3337C,"I disagree with them because the senators have a say in who is going to win the election and be president all at the end,so why worry. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d90a2069a123,1C7FDCD3337C,"In conclusion people should not worry about what happens with the House Of Represintative,or the election,i'd tell folks to leave that up to the senator to decide because there people like us, ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1583bf7f83ad,1CCDBD707F65,"I understand that every 4 years on the first Tuesday of November, the United States undergoes a change in Presidency. This change should be decided in a properly manner by the people and citizens of the country. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5d25155f57b5,1CCDBD707F65,"This explains the purpose of this letter, to abolish the Electoral College. I have this opinion ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d98210f12cb5,1CCDBD707F65,it is unfair to the people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77e2dd6756a2,1CCDBD707F65,the electors tend to provoke the system ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aed5f77d09ce,1CCDBD707F65,"if there is a way to keep it, we can use it if there is a tie between the Presidency voting. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6d75c3248e74,1CCDBD707F65,The best argument that I have towards this action is plain and simple: it's unfair! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ffd17198fc8,1CCDBD707F65,"Voting is all about going to the poll and having the excitment of knowing that your vote can change the next 4 years of your life, including America's life. This should not include the other electors in the house or the people in office. This is a democracy country, therefore, we the people should decide who the President is. With the Electoral College in process, the citizens votes are not a 100% necassity. The
+
+Winner- Take all voting should be established. It's just floating around because it's the first step in voting. The next step is the Electoral College where Congress makes the next decison. This is wrong because the people need to have the final say on the voting because we are effected the most. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ac1c334f8b2,1CCDBD707F65,Another important reason why the Electoral College needs to be voted out is because the electors in Congress tend to provoke the voting ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+54ebe394aca5,1CCDBD707F65,"you are actually choosing your candidate's electors, not the actual president. Now your trust is in the candidates hands. At this point in time, you probably think its safe right? That those people know what  there doing, but chances are that they dont. There goes many other things to stress about! At one point, the candidates did not even vote for the ""correct"" President which is a stab in the back to the voters. This is why there are trust issues with the voting. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c5140f2564f,1CCDBD707F65,"Besides all the negativity that you've been hearing throughout this letter, there is a possibility that we can compromise. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7446d4a51e6,1CCDBD707F65,"First, all the people that want to vote will vote, but the Electoral College will only be needed if there is a tie between the people to Presidency vote. If not, then the people decide. Without the Electroal College present, the smaller states have the same equality and strength as the larger states as
+
+Source 3: In Defense of the Electroal College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president says. That source clearly implies that voters tend to pay too much attention to the campaign but everyone including the people in Congress see it, so what really makes the difference in voting? Without the Electroal College, voting would not be so indecisive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6516861b4fb,1CCDBD707F65,"To sum it all up, the Electoral college is just an unnecassary back up plan when there is not one needed. It is unfair to the citizens and the candidate's electors are unreliable. If there was a way to keep the Electoral College, it would only be for ties. It wouldnt be needed if the vote was a clean win. When the President Election comes in the next 3 years, I hope that you consider my thoughts, because there are plenty people out there with the same perspective.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b95141dbc631,1CD84A125450,"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as compromise between election of President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of a qualified citizens. Each candidate running for President has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party. You help choose your state electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your canidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+115c3fe65266,1CD84A125450,I think we should keep Electoral Colleges ,Position,Adequate,,,
+34cfa454e453,1CD84A125450,It gives people a chance ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6bc3a9fc2fcf,1CD84A125450,"help with responsibility, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5abeb875e7d9,1CD84A125450,and it is competitive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a234e677b86,1CD84A125450,"Initially, it gives everyone in the political group a chance ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7a78f5f99095,1CD84A125450,"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: on for each member in the House of Representitaves plus two for your Senators. The District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. Everyone in the political group votes. That means if you already did'nt ruin your reputation you have a chance at becoming the president because, everyone on at one point and time in the political party is equal. It also make sure everyon is heard, it makes everyone useful for something. The Electoral College gives everybody a chance which is probably the best detail about the system. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86fafd47867c,1CD84A125450,"In addition, Electoral College also hekps with responsibility ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c311658d89b1,1CD84A125450,"Laws are vary on how the electors are selected and what thier responsibilities are. It can either take away responsibilities or give more resonsibilities. This can help people out alot, people won't get task that they can't handle and other people won't get task that would bore them or would be to easy from. It also gies people restrictions that had already had problems or that had did something something that was'nt alowd. This is helpful to those who are'nt very skilled at something, those who are probably to skilled at something, and those who are probably just in the middle. This is also another great detail why we should keep Electoral College. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0479b0a86ba5,1CD84A125450,"Finially, it is competative ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3a430e68a75,1CD84A125450,"Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. This would make would people work harder and strive for higher expectations. The competitiveness level would be even higher becuase everyone is going for the same goal, this would make thing even more exciting to watch and here about. So the Electoral College dose not only just make the system good but it also makes it exciting and competative, which would helpe people want to learn more about the election. Thats another big reason why we should keep Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d8cdf63aea2,1CD84A125450,"In conclusion, Electoral College is very good. It gives people chance to strive for greatness, it helps people with responsibility, and it is very competitave. I think we should keep Electoral College it is a great achievement to our country and is a advantage to our election. It lets everyone be heard, it teaches people how to deal with the roles they have to play the system, and it makes people work harder. I think Electoral College is good for us and we would be dumb not to keep it.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4de0d62b1811,1D0EC331D8F6,"School is a place where students are supposed to be able to learn information and grow as human beings. The main problem with school being a place where students must commute to, is that for some of the students, the environment just isn't the right place for them to learn ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+93ccb1da3b5b,1D0EC331D8F6,"Personally, I believe that for some students, learning from home may be a much more beneficial method of schooling ",Position,Effective,,,
+84b86294c33a,1D0EC331D8F6,some students feel uncomfortable with the school environment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f62002d12df3,1D0EC331D8F6,online school could allow for more freedom in class pacing. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1a43e293d528,1D0EC331D8F6,"A school in it's own can sometimes feel much too clinical for students, too professional, and way too pressuring of an environment. This is why for some students, it may actually be better if they learn from home. For me at least, I find school to be a suffocating environment, where you are surrounded by the pressure of other students and other teachers. One wrong move and your grade could be failing, and you have to face your teacher with that fact. The way I see it, that is way too much pressure to put on a student, for them to feel scared in an environment that is supposed to feel nurturing and calm. Instead, school feels like a prison, and the strict rules and guidelines are what push students to fail. This is why I believe that if students work from home, they will feel much more relaxed, and thus will do much better in classes. Students have a comfort zone, and sometimes a school building and environment crosses that comfort zone, which causes for poor performance ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+59ca9c9b3467,1D0EC331D8F6,"If school was taught from home or online, students would feel more comfortable and thus would do better. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bf9fb0dadaf7,1D0EC331D8F6,"If school was taught online, student would be able to control their class pacing much better than if it was taught in person ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bd71dc39f055,1D0EC331D8F6,"In a normal classroom, your teacher has a strict course schedule that he/she must keep to, and thus forcing students to keep to a strict routine of coursework. I can say this from my personal experience, since I too have dealt with the pressure of having multiple assignments due back to back, and having to turn them in on time or else my grade would suffer for my ignorance. Classes force students of differing levels of learning to all adapt to the same course schedule, with no room for fluctuation, and this is why their grades suffer. If school was to be taught from home or online, while there would still be due dates, it would not have to be as strict. Students could have more freedom to choose how their assignments are to get done and when they needed to be completed. Instead of being forced into some strict class schedule, students would have the rights and the freedom to choose, and I believe that you would see a great difference in their grades. This is why I will argue for school to be taught from home or online, since students would greatly benefit from it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a9c59544ace,1D0EC331D8F6,"School should be taught from home or taught online, because I believe that most, if not all, students would benefit from it. Students would not have to deal with the harsh environment of a school and they would get ability to decide their class pacing better then in school teaching. I believe that all teachers want is for their students to succeed, but how can a student excel when the school system is dampening their motivations with poor environments. As a student myself, I can say with absolute certainty that I would benefit from having school from home. I would not have to feel the pressure of a harsh testing environment and I would never have to deal with teachers, who were frustrated that I could not complete their too many assignments on their due dates. Students need fluidity, and the rigid structure of our school system today is not helping them to succeed. The only way that I see that students would be able to act on full capacity would be to switch to a completely online school system.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+943adcd9d908,1D10B524E194,I think that they should be aloud for only lunch periods and free time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6c25b5f05857,1D10B524E194,I know the teachers think we will abuse the opportunity to use our cell phones. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6db51566d0e3,1D10B524E194,I think if you have it on silent and you don't mess with it in class unless it is and absolute emergency then it is fine. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0b30341a313a,1D10B524E194,If you want to use it in advisory or during lunch then i don't see the big deal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a95e0623664,1D10B524E194,My personal opinion is the cell phone issue is blown way out of per portion ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa5b1564a7fd,1D10B524E194,If the kid wants to check their phone really quick then let them do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3f0104185ee,1D10B524E194,Its not like they have their ring tone blaring or anything. Teachers all know that we remember to put them on silent. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e451f239baf,1D10B524E194,Maybe if a student had the permission to use their phone in school from their parent. The teachers don't allow it but their guardian does. I think the issue should be resolved by parents and not by a student. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7111a6b7ebfe,1D10B524E194,For one no one listens to us. They think were just a teenager looking for an excuse to use out phones. Well its not because maybe ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87b0d9eabd65,1D10B524E194,some kids like to feel safe with their phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38a7281456a4,1D10B524E194,"Its like their security to let them know their safe. Maybe their being bullied and want to talk to someone about it. And they don't want to bring the principal into it all.
+
+They can text their mom or dad and resolve the issue. I think it is important to talk to them. Some kids have anger issues and can only be calmed down by loved ones. Only they can reach you. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3025ef455f5,1D10B524E194,"Well i have expressed my opinion on the Cell Phone Policy and now it is up the school. And i hope you go back and read the story clear because their are reasonable explanations for the reasons for cell phone use. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eadc8399a3cd,1D374A0B26EA,The Electoral College is a process in which each person running for President has his/her own group of electors who are chosen by their political party. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e7a55d0b3d7c,1D374A0B26EA,In my opinion I believe that the Electoral College should not ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c62b944219f3,1D374A0B26EA,"it's not fair that the citizens only get to choose who is their president and who his party choose as Congress, they should  be able to choose who helps the president run the country. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aa14e4925930,1D374A0B26EA,"The President basically just signs the papers that can pass a law but the Congress helps say if the law should pass or not.
+
+People should be able also to choose who they want in Congress beacuse, people want a Congress that they know and trust to help our country turn into a better place. Sometimes the Congress only do what they want and feel is right. The Congress that the party choose may also be people that they like and believe will follow how they feel which may not be  how the citizen feel. I know 538 pepole are alot to vote for and add the president, mayors,and commisioners etc., but atleast we'd have the freedom to pick who we want to help run country and we'd also know they'd try and help make our country amazing. Even if it's part of the Constitution they can change it a little like they alot of other things in it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+849b5b20039c,1D374A0B26EA,"In conclusion people should be able to vote because then we'd be able to choose,so they could feel better about knowing who is passing laws and fixing their country. I may be under age but, I know if I were allowed to vote I'd want to vote for who runs my country and who helps run it. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3d0ccb49c7f7,1D55D4FF63BE,I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+240f489f4f9b,1D55D4FF63BE,"it requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal,its actually a good thing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d4a359442cb,1D55D4FF63BE,"Basically all voters are involved because if it wasnt for that one voter the president wouldnt had been elected as president. A candidate with only one regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president. if we didnt have voters we might would have the worst president of them all, he could do bad things for the country he want, which may affect us as a country. Dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College votye is possible is because, the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1921009e6e19,1D55D4FF63BE,the electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states by population lose by virtue of the mal- apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitutuion ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8e0a79862f74,1D55D4FF63BE,"Large states such as florida , wyoming, gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small states does. It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote . yet that has happened very rarely. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that is rarely betrayed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e03a2c476ed2,1D55D4FF63BE,We can have argue that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off the potential voters for a candidate who has no hope for their state . ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8bdd9e56dd95,1D55D4FF63BE,"They have to be more careful about who they want to vote because, it can cause alot of damge to the president or even the world that we live in. They should let people who already know about the political party's and the democrats and the republicans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbaec7acbba6,1D55D4FF63BE,"We should have our background checked on if we should vote or not because , people have faked thier identity and voted , or even forced someone else to vote for them even if they didnt want to. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2bf99eaf02b,1D55D4FF63BE,"the electoral college is a very important process that goes on in this world just to make our place a better one . If our electoral college do better we can have more oppertunities in life, like when the good president becomes president just like obama , He can do good things with the taxes or even make it easier for kids to have jobs so they wont have to be on the streets doing bad things and maybe even one day they would grow up to be able to vote for thier favoritem president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e625bddcf9a,1D55D4FF63BE,And that is why I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2bb941616078,1D8D04DBA122,I think that you should have a B average and not an A average to play sports ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ece7ea7bebab,1D8D04DBA122,its not fair to the kids who are working hard and trying their best to keep there grades up while playing a sport at the same time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da847dbc734c,1D8D04DBA122,"Now if you have a C then you can be kicked out of the team because school comes before sports and that's why i understand that you can have a C . If i was the best person on lets see the volleyball team and i was working hard and doing my best studying hard, doing everything i could to get that B to an A and i just couldn't do anything else to make it happen because the report cards are about to come in then i would be kicked off the team. I think that the principal should make it a B average to stay in sports because she should know some people really work hard to get were they are today. If some people have troubles at home and cant do anything about them not having an A average then i think it should be a B average to let everyone have a chance to keep it up and know that if they have a C they can work till they can get that B. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+101769acfad8,1D8D04DBA122,Also because if you have an A and your doing things to keep that A and you accidentally didn't turn in your homework for a class you could be kicked off the team for not having an A. Some people are smart and some people have trouble with their school work well if your not very smart then you can help it if you cant get that B to an A average. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7bea7554d56,1D8D04DBA122,some people are working hard and they just cant pick their grades up so they get kicked off the team. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ece6af65a861,1D8D04DBA122,"Most people work hard because they don't want to be kicked off because they love that sport and don't want to get off the team just because they couldn't pass a class in school because they weren't studying or doing their class work. If it was me having that B and working my butt off to get that A for report card and i almost had it but then she wouldn't let me have it because i turned something in late i would be disappointed to see me leave my team in the dust . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e908dfe73815,1D8D04DBA122,So this is why i think we should have a B average to play a sport without out having to worry about getting our grade up. I also can see why she would want to have everyone have an A average because she wants people to have good grades and know that if you don't have the responsibility to keep your grades up then you have to be put off your team because then they would think your not a good student. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+23a3c09126dc,1DC257172C29,Driverless cars should not be developed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+51b72ebcfe56,1DC257172C29,The cars still need the help of people to perform some activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b72cf993120a,1DC257172C29,The cars also will have millions of sensors that at any one point if one goes bad the whole car would not be able to function properly. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+361da83a9781,1DC257172C29,Driving also requires the driver to be alert at all times. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fb3fbb6395c4,1DC257172C29,Driverless cars are going to have ways to entertain the driver instead of keeping the driver focused on the task at hand. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ee47b610bd9c,1DC257172C29,"The cars can brake and go on their own to help the person driving. They also vibrate when you are about to back into something or are drifting into another lane, but they can not correct these things. Some cars can drive themselves but can not function properly when coming to a roadwork area or an accident scene. If a car is incapable of dealing with these contingencies we should not develop them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccdd227e15ea,1DC257172C29,"In paragraph 4 the prompt talks about the cars using LIDAR which is a device that projects a laser and spins on top of the car. Every rotation showing the computer the cars surroundings. While on the road however the LIDAR could spin around and before it get around again an object could have found its way to being in the path of the car giving the car, depending on its speed, hardly any or no time to react. Other sensors could go bad or just the slightest miscalculation or glitch in anything could spell disaster for the car and its passenger(s). These cars should not be developed given today's unreliable technology. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c50d46dbe6f5,1DC257172C29,"In paragraph 8 the questions, ""Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?"" and, ""Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?"", were asked. In the same paragraph the author answers the question by saying, ""We have to interpret the driving fun in new way."" Manufacturers hope to fix that problem by introducing ""in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.""(Paragraph 8) These same ideas contradict the claim in paragraph 9 that says, ""Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best acieved with alert drivers."" How can drivers be alert if they are busy ""having fun"" before the car decides to hand over the controls to the driver. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a9a9a174075,1DC257172C29,"Driverless cars should not be developed because they still require human assistance, there are too many things that can go wrong with the technology required, and that driving takes alert drivers, the same drivers that are going to be ""entertained"" while they wait for their turn to drive. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+973c30a88041,1DD339DE06D4,Students don't listen when the teachers say put your cell phones up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0559d9f9905,1DD339DE06D4,"if they do they sneak and take them out and text their friends and stuff like that we understand that children having cell phones. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b316a2867f57,1DD339DE06D4,When a child in trouble or something they need a cell phone to call someone. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+89c1f711aa53,1DD339DE06D4,When a parent give a child a cell phone they act different they don't know how to put the cell phone down students go out of hand with it they go play on people phone they bully other children. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32b8a3ec35a8,1DD339DE06D4,When students have cell phones they don't how to act with cell phones they act like wide animals when they have cell phones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b0f1386a2f7,1DD339DE06D4,"i thought when kids have cell phones they act manure and stuff they got to act like adults when they get a cell phone. The kids get mad because they be having nasty pictures and nasty text messages and when their parents see them and they take the phone the kids be looking stupid and stuff. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d46f2c67a32f,1DD339DE06D4,Also students grades going down because of the cell phones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c233f5b39c8b,1DD339DE06D4,when they get a phone they don't do nothing in school they just sit in the classrooms and talk or text on the phone that's why they grades dropping. That's why students should get a cell phone when they a little older because students like eight graders don't need to repeat the same grade over they don't need to be in middle school forever. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0af3fdfd0584,1DD339DE06D4,"I think students should wait to get a cell phone because they not going to get nowhere with a cell phone but the same grade over again. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5af65f524803,1DD339DE06D4,When a teacher say students can bring the cell phones the phones got to be off during class ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d048f6448e4b,1DD339DE06D4,because if the teacher teaching and your phone go off that's being disrespectful to the class when the class trying to learn and that's rude when you texting while the teacher is teaching. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd90ae8c3946,1DD339DE06D4,I think students shouldn't have cell phones ay all because that can affect the students grade and make them repeat the same grade. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+78e8ae1b833d,1E2844A2BE02,To start off with the electoral collage should not stay and be the ones to vote for us because its we the people have the choice that we make to pick our leaders weather its the president or congressmen/women or even judges. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3d63a967b339,1E2844A2BE02,But we the people also have a say in this economy on what we want not what the government wants it should be up to us weather we want a good leader or a not so good leader but now lets get on to some resons why th electoraal collage should let us the people be the ones to vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1466feed7d88,1E2844A2BE02,"Now as a quote this from source one this is one reson why we the people should be the ones who decide,""the electoral collage process consist of the selection of the electors.""but now if you see in the end it can be proven that we are not the ones who get to pick its the electoral collage who gets to pick for us. but now if you look at anoher quote from source two it also shows more evidence that we don,t vote for the president but we simply vote for people who we think would represent us the best but ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e149a469e00,1E2844A2BE02,"the qoute still shows why we shoule be the ones to vote for president""under the electoral collage system,voter vote not for th e president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bdc8ba89e99,1E2844A2BE02,Now in the end do you not agree with or what that we the people should be the ones to pick the president and not us be the ones to vote for who we think would represent us best and vote and pick the president for us. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ac7cf5dd67f9,1E5EFF5360E2,"Some people may think that the Face was created by aliens, but it was not. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d43cec7b7987,1E5EFF5360E2,"The face is just a natural landform that is a huge rock formation. No aliens were involved in the making of it. Although it has starred in books, films, magazines and talk shows that does not mean it was created by aliens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+225374356372,1E5EFF5360E2,"To start from the beginning, NASA was just circling Mars taking pictures of possible places where one of the other ships could land. Then it spotted the shadowy rock that looked like a face. A few days after NASA snapped the photo of the Face everyone was engaged in it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+96d5cf96f2db,1E5EFF5360E2,"Anyways, the photo that NASA snapped of the Face was not created by aliens. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+424f8db597ef,1E5EFF5360E2,"If it was NASA would be looking for any form of life on my Mars instead of just calling it a natural landform.
+
+It was just a landform that was created naturally like the ones on Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e3da87a54e0,1E5EFF5360E2,"In conclusion, I would like to say there is no actual evidence that aliens created the landform or that they exist. The Face was not created by aliens and is just made out of rock that happened to form into the shape of a face and as time goes on it looks less like a face. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aefc6b261f2b,1E6CE8FB9C96,"How is the election of the president of the U.S.? The election is base on two parts, the first one is the Electoral College and the second one is the popular vote or the vote of the people. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a3dbcfc85d2f,1E6CE8FB9C96,Changing to the election by popular vote would be a great idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8f85e4bd4034,1E6CE8FB9C96,because the president of the U.S. would be loved and accepted for most of the of the people in United States ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1291e66ed8b7,1E6CE8FB9C96,it less complicated than the Electoral vote that can create a big mess ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f63fec75de10,1E6CE8FB9C96,"According to the beginning of the U.S. Constitution ,''We the people of the United States of America..."", it shows that the people have the right to change the government. When we select someone to be our leader we are selecting someone according to their values and to their actions before being the leader, but we are not selecting someone according to his political view-democrat or republican-. In the Electoral college what they basically due is vote for the president who have the same political view as they have and if that person is going to help them in the future as president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4acf36854531,1E6CE8FB9C96,"So the Electoral College means business, while the popular vote select the president according to what is he going to do with the country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+00610b8a1cdc,1E6CE8FB9C96,"Also the 358 electors cannot represent the whole population of the United States, so basically they are not having a democratic system where everyone have a right. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1a8c93d8259,1E6CE8FB9C96,"For example in 2000 when the elction between Bush and Gore, Gore won the popular vote while Bush won the Electoral vote letting Bush won the precidency.  After Bush won the precidency, he began sending soldiers to Afghanistan and Irac separating millions of U.S families, so the meaning is that people were right that Brush was not going to be a good president since the beginning, but at the end it was the fault of the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f2228dbc5d2,1E6CE8FB9C96,"Sometimes the Electoral College make a well political decision and could problaby help more the government, while the people were just selecting someone that was going to destroy the government ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e0d7b77e50e6,1E6CE8FB9C96,"Ther Electoral College sometimes is unfair against the popular, for example in Florida have 29 electoral votes while Wyoming have only 3 electoral votes is not fair to compare the two of them. The popular vote is easier, must of the times there are no ties so it woukld make it easy to select the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7db04d847d8d,1E6CE8FB9C96,"In the other hand the popular vote would get really tie and one of the person that is running for president would ask for a recount of the vote, so it would take longer to select the president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f3725ca6a90c,1E6CE8FB9C96,"Aslo if is there a tie in the Electoral College the election would be thrown at the House of Representative and giving the Senate the opportunity to select the president, leading to more complexity for choosing a president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8dedcea255a,1E6CE8FB9C96,"At the end the popular vote means the people's vote and a fair election. Voting for the president of the United States is not an easy way, but as you read in the eassay you would see that the popular vote get the highest point for being the easiest one. Having a country that select their own president means that the countruy would accept anything that the precident is doing.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1852709c8e37,1E7013131796,"I think you should allow us to have our cell phones on, and be able to play or use them during free time and lunch. As long as we turn the off when we are asked. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+57b86fd7f542,1E7013131796,"I think allowing us to have them on and use them, would increase the students in getting in trouble ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+65403ded1be5,1E7013131796,"Most people who are getting in trouble are using cell phones, and breaking the school rules. When i first got my phone taken up, i was VERY upset. I thought they couldn't take your cell phone cause they didn't buy them?
+
+But i was wrong, and i figured out they could, because it's the county rules, not JUST your school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d413ded63b2,1E7013131796,"Principal, you should really think about this and give us a chance, because it might work. And if it don't, change the rule back to; no cell phones. I'm pretty sure the students wouldn't mess up!
+
+This is a good opportunity for the students, and maybe even for the teachers!
+
+But, you never know until' you try. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ed96e878cc37,1E7C6D8AB2A2,Dear princpal i think that kid should be able to use there phone on there free time ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2b3a33c58192,1E7C6D8AB2A2,like lunch and then when its time to go back to class they will put them back up and that will be so that kids will not be running out the lunch room and going and the hall doing bad stuff they will be sitting down some where texting and then it will be less fight not saying that we have a lot but i think that it should be a catch to that showing that your grades must be 75%or higher then that then our kids will start getting all there work done they will be trying to get all A'Bs and thing like that all over a little phone can change a lot of things that can be good or bad so lets take and avenge of it and lets get all the good out of it why we can now so that it will no ? about it and we is starting to get bad you can tell us to put them up and do now bring them back out on more or we get them took up and we have to pay 10 to get them back 15 is to much its like you paying for half you bill. that what i think about it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+77f5379ee53b,1ED8279252FB,I think we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+79be57c6b1b9,1ED8279252FB,i think its fair and that everyone should be used to it by now because we have been doing it for a long time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+030da40ff169,1ED8279252FB,"Everyone knows that when you are voting for your candidate you are actully vintg for your candidate's electors. Even though people think the ""Winner-take-all"" system is not fair i think it keeps everything in line. There are reasons why this system was created to prevent major problems from happening. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c91c4e434c2c,1ED8279252FB,"I think that it does not matter if Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and the AFL-CIO all want to Abolish the electoral college ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fd345a7e605b,1ED8279252FB,Sure over 60 percent of votes would prefer a direct electionto the type of elction that we have now ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7912b432e360,1ED8279252FB,but I think it will just cause problmes. We would have to make new rules to when it comes to voting which could take a long time because we would have to have he approval of many people. Then everyone would have to learn these rules and the age to vote could be possibly changed. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e4196d1a8b4c,1ED8279252FB,For everone to get used to these rules could cause many fights and arguements between peopl. The chances of a cadidat of winning could change alot. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+212fd52b6aca,1ED8279252FB,"Popular vote can increase the chances of there being a tie, causing a disater. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6f1ec62a29a,1ED8279252FB,It is possible that the winner of the elctoral vote will not win th national popularf vote. even though that has happened rarely. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e595e931dcb,1ED8279252FB,"Although it did happen once in the year 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was since 1888 ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e696626e9fe3,1ED8279252FB,"With popular vote it is not certain what can happen. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5c3b2f8c1e6,1ED8279252FB,For example the electione of 2012 Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40834f2162e2,1ED8279252FB,"Therefore  the electoral votes should not be abolished, popular votes will only cause problems.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c4ce3c2a633,1EF5AB00CBCB,I was once asked to write a letter about keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+393c386ffdaa,1EF5AB00CBCB,My Opinion is that they need to change Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54d1649ed71d,1EF5AB00CBCB,"The three reasons why they should keep it is because, its not fair ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a9d8c51b1d0,1EF5AB00CBCB,it dosen't waste a lot of time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb1e4c29b0c5,1EF5AB00CBCB,the electoral votes given to each state. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6d93010f9d15,1EF5AB00CBCB,Electoral Voting seems very easy ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+be81f1469e0a,1EF5AB00CBCB,"Electoral College consists of 538 electors. They need a majority of 270 electoral votes to elect the prsident. But their a lot of things wrong with the electoral college too. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election. And voters vote not for the president,but for the slate of electors, who select the president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92d34fcd5c78,1EF5AB00CBCB,"Becasue of the winner take all system, the candidates dont spend much time in the states they know they dont have a chance of winning. This is one of the reasons why they should change Electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+54ec59e85d86,1EF5AB00CBCB,But the System dosent waste a lot of time. This is probaly the only reason they still use it today. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6939df2cc5cd,1EF5AB00CBCB,"All they do is go state by state seeing the candidates group of electors  votes. This process takes about 3 to 4 Hours to see what candidate won to be the president of the United States Of America. The President election is held every 4 years, on the tuesday after the first monday in November. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+890726efeffb,1EF5AB00CBCB,But this is another reason why the Electoral collge system needs to be changed to popular vote. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6108b61ab937,1EF5AB00CBCB,"Last But Not Least, The electoral votes given to each state sucks. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4523e92b7b42,1EF5AB00CBCB,Its not fair Texas gets 38 electoral but New York only gets 3. Way more people live in New york Than Texas. If they used election by popular vote everyone has the choice to pick which candidate they want to be president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0336eae286ed,1EF5AB00CBCB,And The elctoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism. Its hard for a democratic to win it. The Electors that elect for president not the people. This is another why this needs to be change. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e51602a6cf62,1EF5AB00CBCB,"To brieflty conclude, the system needs to be changed. its not fair to have and electoral voting system. the people dont get to vote for the candidate they want to win. These are some of the reasons why the system needs to be changed. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+147e0878787f,1EFA2916E5A8,"I personally do not think students should be required to perform community service. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+7843c6a31751,1EFA2916E5A8,"I think doing community service is great and that kids should at least do some. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+88b37023d8d6,1EFA2916E5A8,"But if it is required then that takes away from it being a good deed. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+77ce04aa3162,1EFA2916E5A8,If you want some good done you should encourage community service more but don't require it won't teach anybody a lesson if they did not chose to do so themselves. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea667874d477,1EFA2916E5A8,It would be hypocritical if you require it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a6a73f147b39,1EFA2916E5A8,and that does not look good for any school if they are proclaimed to be a hypocrite by the public ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d51330e1100,1EFA2916E5A8,Because when something takes up a person's free time that makes that person sad ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a5e3ed2308f2,1EFA2916E5A8,and you want a happy community don't you? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f229e1793c5,1EFA2916E5A8,Like the saying goes all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f5adb92fe7d,1EFA2916E5A8,it would also in the world of to day make him and his community be the butt of someone else's joke and no body wants that. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5dba2ebbff33,1EFA2916E5A8,"Also Imagine you were an elderly person.
+
+Would like it better if the person helping you out is there because they want to be or because they have to be. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+744661229dbf,1EFA2916E5A8,You probably like many other people picked because they want to be because it makes you feel like someone cares. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38cfdc9cab7f,1F0B13A90754,"A president election is great but, there are some difficulties along the way of deciding who will be able to vote. People are asking themselves whether or not they should keep the electorial vote or get rid of it and have a popular voting method. To me, the popular voting method is reasonable. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d9258a04ee0b,1F0B13A90754,I believe that you shiould get rid of the electorial collage method and change it to the popular voting method ,Position,Adequate,,,
+93da75f48148,1F0B13A90754,its fair to the voters ,Claim,Effective,,,
+896ba0480591,1F0B13A90754,"YOU are able to vote for the president of your choice, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+97a50718d7d2,1F0B13A90754,because of the winner-take-all system. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f168f1fa590e,1F0B13A90754,"You need to think about everyone in the all the states not just electing your president. Your people need to agree with the choice that has been made. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c39589af4f0,1F0B13A90754,The electorial collage should be changed to the popular voting method because it is unfair to the voters. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5bfd5d333cc9,1F0B13A90754,"Eeveryone should have a say in what goes on where ever it is that they live. We the people make up the government. Who draws the line that states whether or not you are allowed to vote. We do! Therefore we should be able to decied ourselves who can be our president to the United States of America. It is niot fair that we need to elect others to have our submission be made. Even when we tell our electors who we choose, they might turn arouhd and vote for the other person. In
+
+Source 2 ""The indefensible electorial college : why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer""
+
+backs up my response when stating,""In the same vein, 'faithless' electors have ocasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please..."". That to me my friend, is not fair at all. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7bdd05deaca3,1F0B13A90754,"With the popular voting method you are able to choose the president of your choice, not the president's electors. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5142c97265bc,1F0B13A90754,"In doing this you are having a fair vote in the election with everyone who is eligable to vote, voting whomever they please. If you vote for your own president of your choice there will not be any elector deciding for you if they do not like what you have elected. We need to have a say in what we want. I mean if we want someone to be watching over us, and deciding what to do, we want someone who everyine agrees on. Just a few hundred poeoplpe choosing for you is nothing compared to approximatley more than a million people choosing for themselves. In
+
+Source 2 ""The indefensible electorial college : why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer""
+
+it says that the electors can always defy the will of the people. In my case I believe that no one would want that. I mean, would you want that? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18accb495950,1F0B13A90754,"People don't usually spend time in states they know the don't have a chance at winning. Who would? these states only focus on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. Sometime around the 2000 campaign, apporximately 17 states didn't at all see those candidates. Even when there were voters in states that had 25 of the largest media markets, they were not able to see not even one ad from the campaign. This is being said in
+
+Source 2 ""The indefensible electorial college : why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer"" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d921239073c1,1F0B13A90754,"For my conclusion this proves that there are many difficulties along the way of an election, regarding the votes and voters. With this letter being written, people should not wonder whether or not the electoral college should be abolished, and go with the popluar voting method. You shouldn't be thinking about just a couple of people, but of a whole nation and deciding who is worthy enough in our eyes to lead us to more victories with the popular voting method.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d91fd89e528b,1F11C3F72282,Driverless cars are some what useful for us ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c59302a1e273,1F11C3F72282,because maybe elder people want to go out and they don't have anyone to take them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39e71eb128e6,1F11C3F72282,"The teenagers may get bored of just sitting there and not drive, but the older people wont because they could relax. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1dcc63be3501,1F11C3F72282,"It could be useful either way, maybe some teens would like it because they enjured something, they wouldn't be able to drive now but they could if we had driverless cars. In the passage ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" they said something about putting something in the car to entertain them and making sure they keep their heads up at all times. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c3d72ae9bdd,1F11C3F72282,"Just because there is driverless cars coming soon doesn't mean that people can just drive them around whenever they feel like it, its same as being a car when you have control. You still have to watch out and go the speed limit, you can't take it and sleep when it's driving. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a4b7300fc924,1F11C3F72282,Over the past years cars have developed a lot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+027d171c97d1,1F11C3F72282,"Now there are cars that you can turn on while you're still in the house, some cars have wifi, you can turn the heat on, and open doors before you get to the car. People want what is new so they can show something off but they don't show off the problems they could have with the car. Now they are making this new thing where a car can drive you around itself without you having to take control? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd468057be9f,1F11C3F72282,"Have they thought about the car accidents that could happen? Or how it could injure someone? This will take more responsibility than what a driver has now.
+
+Would there have to be any test taking for those who want their permit or license? How do you know if they are capable of being in control over those things? Having the cars we have now are good enough. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1aad8924c646,1F11C3F72282,"Those who want a driverless cars should still capable of doing the things they do now with a regular car. Senors will still be in the cars, if adding them to the new cars that would make it better for the person and the car. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d41cd58bae0c,1F11C3F72282,"They want to know who would be responsible for an accident? Well it would be the persons fault. If they aren't looking at the road because they were distracted by something else than that could be bad. They should be able to take control when they see something bad is about to happen.
+
+Now if the driverless cars come with speaking instructions that could make things better because you can tell it what to do. If there is traffic and your vechile is going to fast you should be able to tell it to slow down. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72afe98715ba,1F11C3F72282,Whether they're or no driverless cars people should always be safe while driving. They should always have their eyes on the road and be able to look to their right and left to make sure it is clear to move over. With this coming out people probably think it will be safer or dangerous. They should put things to entertain them so they can be focused on the road instead of their phones. People should still have to take the driving test with their control. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4159f45961f9,1F30B1F276A7,i think that students should perform community service it would be great for our community and should be required or mandatory for the school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e8a7bdd6d4ad,1F30B1F276A7,for the greatness that it would bring to our community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa910eabbe22,1F30B1F276A7,"for instance you could teach a mean and disrespectful kid who has no respect for his teachers to gain respect on the effect they have on the community should he do community service, you could teach 6the graders the meaning of life just by picking up trash after all a tutor elementary school has there kids doing work keeping there community clean why shouldn't the same go for ours, if an adult sees a 6the grader picking up trash you would think he will say why shouldn't i pick up trash kids picking up trash are good examples to the community, and this might clean up our streets more that you think about it, this is also so good way to support many child obesity campaigns such as Mitchell obama this would more than likely get media attention , keeping kids active and of the streets from doing drugs and crimes, or away from them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9c29b096296,1F30B1F276A7,these here are all the reasons i think community service would have a drastic affect on our community signed ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0ba1c9dfeee9,1F56575F6388,I believe that cell phones should be allowed in school at lunch time but if you have them out during class you'll receive the normal punishment. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1e610f8a39f8,1F56575F6388,What would be the point of not allowing students to have they're cell phones out during lunch? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f3a41b63de3,1F56575F6388,They are eating and/or talking to friends. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf37352c892d,1F56575F6388,"Although, the only true downside to this is if your texting it does not always get to the other persons phone right away, depending on the amount of signal you or they have it could take 5 seconds or it could take 30 minutes ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8d8fbb502314,1F56575F6388,And because of that the students cell phone could ring in the middle of class and end up having them in detention with they're phone taken away. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d722f28f4a39,1F56575F6388,"So as you can see in the first two paragraphs that there is a good thing and a bad thing about allowing students to have there cell phones out during school hours, or at least class room time, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+194e6e04b4c9,1F56575F6388,"why can't we also have our cell phones out during school dances, it would not be very different from lunch time and your after school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d408a6771aae,1F56575F6388,"The only problem i can see by allowing this is if you drop your phone, leave it somewhere, or its been stolen. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fb00bd3b82f8,1F56575F6388,These things are not very big things to worry about ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aa595da062ec,1F56575F6388,"some of these things don't really have a complete point to, like the one for school dances in the last paragraph, it doesn't really have a reason why we can not have them out. Truly there has to be a really good explanation for not allowing this. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ef29cdf5d96,1F56575F6388,"Now for not allowing them in class I understand, the way I see it is because students will, most likely, most of their time texting or calling friends or family about what they are going to do after school ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4b67da24ba05,1F56575F6388,"If this is allowed the this will probably happen, the students will not pay attention, they will not learn, won't get their homework finished, they might get held back a grade, not graduate, not go to college, won't get a very good job (that they actually like to do), from then on their are a few more problems and all because the school allowed cell phones in class ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffd99e8774f9,1F56575F6388,that doesn't mean that this will happen to everyone ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a3a31bea4399,1F56575F6388,"some will actually want to pay attention, finish homework on time, and so on. But luckily schools don't allow phones out whenever the student wants to text his/her friend but maybe at lunch or at school dances. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21e52cfbb357,1F56575F6388,"Now throughout this response i have said/typed what I think is, in a way, best for the school and that is to carry out with the no cell phones in school policy. Because the student might lose his/her cell phone or other electronic device. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a8390677b384,1F6AB4756E2B,I do think that all students should be required to perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3d17b45db764,1F6AB4756E2B,I think that all students need to participate in helping out where they live ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+510e140e40f3,1F6AB4756E2B,I think that students should only have to do it once every four or five months or so ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd244a277fed,1F6AB4756E2B,"I think that you should be able to pick your community service, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45fd64b1e2df,1F6AB4756E2B,"such as if you like to help with kids, help out at an elementary school, or pre-school . If you like to play sports, you should be able to pick helping out with community sports, like soccer or basketball. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2384c41f989d,1F6AB4756E2B,"I think if all students have to do community service, it will make it a better community, and people will be more involved ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bf8255e4a5c,1F6AB4756E2B,"But, i don't think you should have to do community service all the time, because i think that students will get sick of it doing it a lot of times. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6cafbec3da50,1F6AB4756E2B,"Students should not be forced to something they don't want to do, like if they don't like school you shouldn't make them do tutoring for there community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+559a4520cef0,1F6AB4756E2B,"I think if you have students do it only on occasions, they would enjoy it, and look forward to d doing it more. Maybe if you do it twice a year, then it will be something for the students to look forward too. They might like it better because they only have to do it on occasions, not all the time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0632b5e6dacd,1F6AB4756E2B,"A lot of people or places need the community service. They need help with kids stuff, and cleaning up your community. It will make the students think more about helping out there community, and maybe make them want to do it more often. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c3ff6c65eae,1F6AB4756E2B,"But then again, a lot of people might not want to do it. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e2daddc5ec03,1F6AB4756E2B,"I think for people who actually participate and really help out with the community service, they should get a little reward. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+57db2c8f4ed2,1F6AB4756E2B,"They should get extra credit in a class or something, because people who aren't participating shouldn't get rewarded for not doing anything. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ff688d5e00a,1F6AB4756E2B,"I think that students should only have to do it time to time, not once a month ore week. I think that students should be-able to pick what they want to do for community service, not have the principle, or somebody else pick. I think that having community service be required is a good idea. I think it will really change the way the town it. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d7bdf2b71887,1F8354F0A861,Many people enjoy the idea of community service, others do not. ,Lead,Adequate,,
+3eddaf6f5c4e,1F8354F0A861,"I believe that students have the right to choose what they would rather do, instead of being forced to do so. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+8a5583b7c229,1F8354F0A861,"Some kids already do some community service.
+
+It would mainly affect the kids that don't. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2455759d2fc4,1F8354F0A861,"Even though community service is the right thing to do, it should not be forced upon anybody. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c1827c93b604,1F8354F0A861,"The students need some of their own freedom.
+
+We are already facing being a teenager and school.
+
+We need to be able to make a few more decisions in our everyday lives. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e32e5eb1eec5,1F8354F0A861,"On the other hand, every student performing community service will help the city extremely well. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+73d8708b78f5,1F8354F0A861,"The streets will be cleaner, the buildings shinier, and the gardens greener.
+
+Everyone in the city will leave their homes with a smile on their face! 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b7168b98e82f,1F8354F0A861,"For example, one of my friends volunteers at an elementary school as a tutor.
+
+He enjoys it a lot, especially when one of the kids gets a good grade on something he taught them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ccdeabcc0bcc,1F8354F0A861,"However, some of my other friends don't like the idea of community service because it takes away from their free time. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+431e4d76d59a,1F8354F0A861,"Personally, I am not liking the idea of being forced to make the city a better place.
+
+It shouldn't be part of the curriculum.
+
+The students should make the decision themselves. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c58a5df1e21d,1F8ECF8C118D,if i had to choose i would change to election vote  cause it is more popular and it has less problems unlike the other  cause when you do electoral college you have to do lots ofdifferent things that is not worth doing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bd459ee43b71,1F8ECF8C118D,other people are saying how good the electoral college is ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8f9e93fc4634,1F8ECF8C118D,if its so good why do you so many issues with things that happen to people ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d1f387f360ff,1F8ECF8C118D,thats what i dont understand they dont let some people vote cause there age which is stupid they should  let them vote thats the reason why ther areso many disputes in the world cause of the ignorance of some people and the only thing the people from electoral college is worried about iswinning instead of carring for the other people which is not right that is the reason so many outbreaks happen cause people start to not even give a crap about the people that is wanting to vote but the people is not worriedtwo cents about what anyone else thinks their just worried bout  themselves which is stupid and they should have been done something about this before it get to much out of control which is leading to much more problems it needs to come to a end and pick a president who would actually give a care about the people of the united states  instead them going around and talking about them in different ways that is not needed cause only a majority of people votes for him doesnt mean that he or she has to be a complete jerk to them and start talking bout them in bad ways that is how many fights start and when they start they dont ever stop talking bout it for a long period of time which pisses people off what if someone started talking bout you or your parents you would want to beat the crap out of them then there would be catastrophic failure which leadsto more and more drama which just makes things even worse nominees get happy that they won the vote and start getting all crazy and start saying things just to get people all ticked off and things that really didnt meanto happen happens to people that did not even do anything to hurt that person at all which is messed up cause they dont give no effort to even say they are sorry for what they did to that person the advocates that are in the position they say things that make arguements and other things that dont need to happen begin which doesnt make things any easier it just causes more drama that doesnt need to happen cause even more trouble that is not a good thing to have happen when that happens it just has bad things happening everywhere and it only makes things worse which leads to cause even more drama in peoples life and it doesnt seem fun getting out of all that drama that happened    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1ef22a4aa258,2007A7232687,The Eletoral College should stay because this has been the system that has been used for years in the united states and i dont think that it would be respectful to the ones that have been choosen by this system. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e4cd27bd7245,2007A7232687,Most of the people who dont like this system of voting will most likely say that we the people dont really know any thing about who we are voting and that most of us who are voting for someone are just voting for them just because we have heard good thinds about them ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e44b42298842,2007A7232687,"I'm not going to lie and say that none of the people who do get to vote are all voting because they know their stuff about the candidates, but some of us who do know about the candidates and how they are working should not lose the right to vote for who ever we would like. If we dont get to vote for who we like and believe is better then what type of country are we. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+59d122fe96aa,2007A7232687,If all of the states would have same electoral vote then things would be harder because we mostly at some point will have a tie ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dd19a6cf4d9e,2007A7232687,this would cause major problems but since every state has a different number it is not likely that both candidates will end up with the same number of votes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2b36a370123,2007A7232687,Another reason people dont like this system is because most states have a winner takes all system where they dont spilt up the elector votes if most of the votes are for one candidate then he will get all of the votes from that state. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+58b454600ffa,2007A7232687,This causes lots of people to rage on the Electoral college because they feel that the state is taking there right to vote and to be different. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da982cab2b79,2007A7232687,The other good thing about Eletoral college is that no certain region can win a election so this makes candidates campaign in states that they no they can win. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+121032e3a779,2007A7232687,This also is something that people do not like because for example when the canidates were Obama and Romney and lets say he put alot of his campaigns in new york this would cause the new yorkers who are going with Obama to get mad and start to protest because they arent see anything from Obama so they might turn to the next candidate. This actually helps because when people favor someone this makes it even harder for a tie to happen in the election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0885aea60200,2007A7232687,Many of the people who are going agaist say that we are not voting for a president that we are voting for a slate of electors ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3294ad08407b,2007A7232687,This is true but if we are voting for electors that are going to vote for the president that we would like its  just like voting for the president there is not difference. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4ff147037fb8,2007A7232687,Some people who are going agaist Elector college use this to trick people and make them go agaist it but if you know about Elector College this wont happen. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2cb68a0671e2,2007A7232687,"Elector College should not be taken away in any matter because this is the easiest, best, and oldest way that we have of picking the new leaders for our country.                                       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cced83e41e73,2022B8E2B360,"i think we can help this community by helping,clean,stop littering and start helping everyone so that this world can live longer then the outher worlds did ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+8afc2f45a118,2022B8E2B360,and communty service is if people that not doing what there not post to do and outhers can do it to help this community and this world will be ok we wont have to find an new home we will just be fine we need to stop all the killing and more help people get back on there feet we need to find pets homes keep people of the streets the crime that's happing we need to try to stop it help people that in need help them like feed them and outhere stuff to make this place an better place we need to help each outher we just need to get to geathere and get alone with one and anthere and bring this world togeathere when we do that then we can stand up for our self and help outhere that need help and save the needes we can do this we cant be scard to do it ya we need some of it but we can help when we get it then when we have the stuff we need we can give the rest to needes that would give them a lot to live for and us to so that what we need to do to this community but we cant do this becouse some people is greaty over money thay will try to teas us with it so we can be just like them but i don't care i share my stuff be when im out i go work for my money then when i get what i need ill give the rest away to the needes i donat food to needes every day to help so those that is in need of help i pray for them and i help an lil girl find her famely she was lost for 20 days i let her stay at my house till we found her famely then i found 200 on the ground i was think for an min what im going to do so i save it and i still got it till this day till i need it ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13a6f6183c8c,202A2848311C,"Schools are not only about learning math, English, science and history. Schools are also about learning how to interact with other people, and if a student does not attend school they will be behind those who do. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fb8e694eb0b9,202A2848311C,I think online classes would not benefit students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40a125262b8b,202A2848311C,in the social aspect of life ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bda5ae1e1ec7,202A2848311C,in performance in academics. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e621f9d4863,202A2848311C,During anyone's time in school whether it is a private school or a public school they encounter other students which helps develop social skills which are important to survive in the real world. The online schooling would not only make those who take it feel like their alone but it will make their adult life far more difficult ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cd3c976a3fe2,202A2848311C,"In the real world, future adults will have contact with a lot of people and students who had an interaction with other students will have an easier time doing so in their adult life. Unlike kids who spent their time in a room all by themselves learning, they will have to adapt to having interactions with other people. For example if a student who took the online classes in a future job had to present something for his boss, the student would have a difficult time getting his point across to other people because of the missing interaction with other people during their developmental years. Now if a student who attended school with other people did this it would be much easier for them because they would know how to talk to others and get their point across. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1940e1165d11,202A2848311C,Another reason is that some kids learn better with others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c14c4d03f97c,202A2848311C,"Sure there may be the usual kid that does not want to be around other people but there's not many of them. For example my friends and I enjoy coming to school because we see each other and also because it has a sense of competition in terms of who has the better grades. I think when other kids are around and doing better than you it makes you want to try harder. Second if a student you sat next to in math class or in history was doing better than you in your mind you would say, oh i want to be like that, making you want to try harder and ultimately do better in school. In any competition teams push themselves to the limit, whether its a race, the final of a championship game or the last play in the game, teams try their hardest because the other team is doing so as well. Students will do that too, but they need other students to compete with which would not happen in online school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3fa179db36e1,202A2848311C,The last reason why online schooling from home would not benefit a student is because they will simply skip the class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ac4d42db8be,202A2848311C,"No matter who you are, you have your lazy moments. You have those moments where you just don't want to do anything, these moments usually happen at the comfort of your own home. Times like this are easily avoided by attending school, the student wakes up in the morning gets ready, walks to their bus stop and off they go to school. A student who has class at home may or may not forget about their class or even worse know they have it and decide not to do it because they are at home. There is no choice in whether you will go to school today or not, most of the time it's a yes, your parents say you have to go to school and that is what you have to do. Online classes can be avoided if the student just does not do it. Students are supervised in school at all times whether its administration during lunch, or by a teacher in class. Who is going to supervise the student at home? if a parent is home they might do it but if there is no parent it's up to the student to make that decision and its usually a I am too tired to do this. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41b0302539e4,202A2848311C,Online school may be only fit for a certain amount of students. For example students who work or live too far from a school may be able to benefit from doing it ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d4c405cb168f,202A2848311C,but the majority of kids would not ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+6037fd72de3e,202A2848311C,"Online school has its wins but it is also very faulty. It can be easily be avoided by lazy students, it can have a big impact in the future of the student and it can have an change performance in a bad way. Therefore most students will not benefit from online school and it will slow them down. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+06d410b91269,20C21D4E5A6C,"When did voting not become about the people? An electoral college is only reassuring that your vote is the only vote that counts, but why mislead the people? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+92d7b5289e20,20C21D4E5A6C,"Changing the voting system to popular vote will give all of us that reassurance we need, such as knowing our voices are being heard. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b02e3ce3f334,20C21D4E5A6C,There are 538 electors deciding our country's fate compared to 5 million citizens who have a fair understandment of the presidency. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b702851c98a,20C21D4E5A6C,Even though keeping the electoral college may prevent some citizens voting for the wrong person ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+085179c75113,20C21D4E5A6C,we still have some smart people who can vote for themselves. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2331cc9bd9a4,20C21D4E5A6C,"In the 2000 U.S. pressidential race, Al Gore recieved more individual votes than George W. Bush from the popular vote but Bush won the electoral votes, recieveing 271 votes and Gore got 266 ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ff1af9be769,20C21D4E5A6C,This was the only presidential election where the popular vote was not counted. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22ff29dd1cd2,20C21D4E5A6C,What about the states who only have 1 or 2 representatives? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd8de848f4c2,20C21D4E5A6C,"Wyoming only has 1 representative who represents 500,000 voters compared to California's whopping 35 million voters and 55 representatives.
+
+Some of these smaller states are not getting their fair vote because their states population. Florida, New York, Texas and California have over 20 representatives to represent each state; how is that fair to the neighbor states with 2-3 representatives? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51a7065fd1c6,20C21D4E5A6C,"The electoral college is unfair, outdated and irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47ec8382057c,20C21D4E5A6C,"If you want the peoples voices to be heard, get rid of your voting backup 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2c767807d3b8,20D0120E0F48,I've heard about the situation on the community service idea. But is it really our choice to choose for other people? Shouldn't the students have a voice on there own opinion wether they do community service. Or even if the whole school does community service. Our school should have a vote on this situation so that our school will come to an understanding. Some of the students believe that the community service wastes there time. While others believe that it is good for our community and will help our country in the long run. Our school will be chaos if we do not solve our problems now. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+d6705555561b,20D0120E0F48,To me I don't think community service would be bad for us ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1fcb2cec4665,20D0120E0F48,It's not like its going to kill us. But we need to let our school vote on the situation ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+18a514017021,20D0120E0F48,or else there will be people saying that the choice was one sided and was not fair. If we let the kids vote we will not be accused of anything and the decision will be made at the same time. As a student i believe that you will choose what is right after you have read this letter. But really think about this decision you are making. Either way some kids will like you're decision and others will hate it. But you can't run away from the situation you have to make a decision or else it will never end. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6aaf06ff75cb,20D0120E0F48,But to me I think we shouldn't be doing community service. That is more of a personal decision a person makes for themselves ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8e794ffacec8,20D0120E0F48,And it wont help with our curricular activities ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c54452fa086f,20D0120E0F48,But there can be a compromise to help with this situation. We can start a club for students after school where they can go do any kind of community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e673e61da880,20D0120E0F48,That way everybody's happy and there will no arguments. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d63369a5c15,20D0120E0F48,I also think that middle school kids shouldn't be handling elementary children. We are not certified and do not have a license. Some of the students might also not know C.P.R.. Which eigth graders are learning C.P.R. and are learning the techniques to help anyone. Knowing C.P.R. can decide wether a child lives or dies. I mean everybody knows that kids in elementary school like to chew on toys and sometimes don't chew there food all the way and they start to choke. The middle school children if they don't know C.P.R. they will be scared and will not know what to do. That's why i feel a middle school child should not be handling a elementary child by themselves. The only way that they should be allowed to do so is that they have the child's parent or an adult they know to help watch the child so nothing goes wrong. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a6102cdce12,20FE40010F03,I read your policy's on the internet so i am going to respond in my best opinion ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+23e17acff596,20FE40010F03,"I think if you don't let students have phones in school, then their be no point of having rules. yes i know that students text during classes but their are kids what can you do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc365ca0b925,20FE40010F03,But if you let them have phones and use them during free time. Then the kids will call and text each other on the whole school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bde1411f191,20FE40010F03,"Then that will be bad, and they will still don't have any education and will not pass their classes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0473ae1927f0,20FE40010F03,my guess is to not have cell phones at all or their will fail at school and in life. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea8a91b8e9ff,20FE40010F03,if you let them have phones the you will be the most popular and cool principle of all time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8979ed18ad48,20FE40010F03,if you don't then they will hate you for ever and do bad stuff to you ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+95fb185fbf28,20FE40010F03,what do you chouse popularity or the education for the kids. But my decision is no cell phones ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b51aa0514dbc,214BC7CE00D1,"With so many opinions on the electoral college, theres reasons in which to keep it or abolish it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8ae8a56e9abc,214BC7CE00D1,I would like a favor in keeping The Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f0cfa88cab30,214BC7CE00D1,its an election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d186e6418e7f,214BC7CE00D1,"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress(Source 1,2). Without The Electoral College everything will fail due to the fact that the college does all the voting and picking and decideing if not the Electoral College then who else will do it; All the other congessmen has to do there own job in which they cant do what The Electoral College does. The Electoral College has been in plce for a while The founding fathers created it. Its consists of 538 electors ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb6e207ebfc7,214BC7CE00D1,"There are disadvantages to like voters dont vote for the president, but for a slate electors, who votes for the president. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+43e320f5355a,214BC7CE00D1,But then theres advantages ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+45a9f03443bf,214BC7CE00D1,"The Electoral College is widely regareded as an anachronish, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+defb451b633a,214BC7CE00D1,"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense. it is the electors who elect the president, not the people(source 3). When you vote for a presidental candidate youre actually voting for a slate of electors ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8c3e8013441,214BC7CE00D1,People have thier own opinions but i think it would be better to keep the the traditional going on keeping the electoral college. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+06f95f4ed732,2158A5D15F84,"On May 24, 2001, about 25 years ago the NASA's viking spacecraft was circling the planet. It then spotted a human like face. It was huge! It was nearly two miles long. It looked like it had been staring back at the camera from where this picture had been taken. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d94048463676,2158A5D15F84,The face is clearly a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d16b2b633309,2158A5D15F84,"When Mars Global flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin snapped a picture ten times sharper than the first photo. When this picture was taken it was a very cloudy day. This means that the camera had to peer through all the clouds to get this good of a picture ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c11879fe867f,2158A5D15F84,But skeptics say that the aliens images were hidden by the haze. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bb5762dbf758,2158A5D15F84,That cannot be true becasue if the aliens were hidden we would not have such a great picture of the faces. That completly shows that there is proof that this face is just a natural landform. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2a547fe7b3fd,2158A5D15F84,"This is a great natural landform and it is very questionable at first, if this could really just be a natural landform. But knowing that the NASA has went out more than one time and taken pictures of this face really does show that it is not aliens. Not only have we taken pictures but we have proof. These are all the reasons why it is certain that this face is a natural landform.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d834f00d21b3,217A7429341D,"Hey OTHER_NAME want to performs some community service hours and pick up some trash.'' ``Ill think about it,'' my friend OTHER_NAME said as he walked away. I dint think he is going to think about it. He is a very lazy person, i guess im all by myself then. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a9c2db2a42c6,217A7429341D,Helping the community is a great thing to do. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e4e8d7370227,217A7429341D,"My favorite activity to help out the community is picking up trash. One reason is because it keeps the community clean, another is it saves wild animals. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb4ce960498e,217A7429341D,"I recall a time when i was seven i visited California. When i was there i saw a sign that said volunteer hours from 6-7 pm Monday threw Friday. I thought in my head wowo what a great opportunity. I took on the challenge and i was amazed at the outcome of what i did. Every thing in that area was as clean as a wisthe. I thought to myself wow look what community service can do. I also recall a time when i was ten years old i saw this animal walking down the street. I was amazed because i saw this big soda can on his head. I went to go take it off and i found out something else. The poor little bird was chocking on a piece of paper. I called animal serevice right away for help. They the bird and saved its life. I thought to myself, now if somebody would have threw it in the garbage this would of never happend. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94fae67ff501,217A7429341D,"In conclusion, community service is great i think people should do more of it. Just one hour of it can make a difference. Even just picking up something up from the floor can make a change. Do it for the animals and yourself. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bf2286334b41,2181C567F6B0,I want to know why are you changing the policy for sports. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e298305e88cd,2181C567F6B0,Most children these day have about a C not a B because they are more focus on the sport then the grades. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+22504f6c9bee,2181C567F6B0,They work on school work after practice. They really don't have time too be studying with the rate there going they only want too play a sport. they might not be as good in school and only know how to play a sport and your messing it up for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d972579d12a0,2181C567F6B0,"just look into it and think about it. Or look at all the players grades and see what they have, its not lower then a C ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7a1949a7af40,2181C567F6B0,so don't change the policy in till you see grades go up in too the B range. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9b1f83e7ffa9,2181C567F6B0,But really what you should be doing is having study hall for the kids to study before practice every other day for about three week or in till you see some grades go up and if that doesn't work who every isn't doing there work just kick them out of sport in till grades goes up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c6e8ea88719,219F04FD37B6,"Driverless cars are coming in the future. In the future, no one will probably need to buy cars because they won't need them. According to Google cofounder Sergey Brin, that will happen. He sees a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public- transport taxi system. The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. There are many great things about driveless cars, but there are some bad things as well. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+4aee618ba1e7,219F04FD37B6,Driverless cars are really beneficial. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f233639befd6,219F04FD37B6,Driverless cars have way more senors and alerts than regular cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+23b512de2852,219F04FD37B6,"For example, if the car is about to back up into an object, the driver's seats will vibrate to let you know. Also, within the past 10 years, sensors on the driverless cars have become way more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d952e2e89646,219F04FD37B6,Driverless cars are also very safe to use. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b1f38fa2e145,219F04FD37B6,"The cars can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mile per hour, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. Even though the word ""driverless"" may scare you, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. Which means you are still somewhat in control of the car. The cars may be able to steer, accelerate and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. The driver must stay alert and be ready to take over when the time comes. The car can quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs. GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Basically, while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. (Paragraph 7) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+708310fe38de,219F04FD37B6,"Driverless cars are going to become the next big thing. They won't just become beneficial to you, but everyone else as well. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5b197bc08d69,219F04FD37B6,"The cars would only use half the fuel that today's taxi use. Which is a huge deal because we as a whole, we use a lot of fuel. Also, it will offer more flexibility than a bus. Just imagine that. Google cofounder Sergey Brin believes these such cars would fundamentally change the world, and everyone else should believe that too. (Paragraph 1) 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f08a15d8e3b5,219F04FD37B6,Some people may agrue that letting a car be in control is just absurb. You never know what the car might do. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d5f7efd94832,219F04FD37B6,"It could end up causing you to end up in a wreck, or maybe it won't slow down and the brakes won't work. Even though you are alert, what can you do if something goes wrong? Nothing. If the car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves there is not a whole lot you can do to stop it. You just never know with a driverless car. You are putting yourself ar risk while you are in the car because you are not 100% in control of the car and that is not safe. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c5549d3e728,219F04FD37B6,"In conclusion, driverless cars are very safe and have major benefits. Some people may be scared of letting a car be in a control, instead of them being in control of the car. But no one should have nothing to worry about. As long as you stay alert, you should be fine. Even though the car can do many things by itself, it still sends you heads up when it needs your assistance. Driverless cars coming very soon in the near future. Try them and see how they are. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9570e21d008f,21A162D4B0CB,The process of voting through the Electoral College was established in the Constitution by our founding fathers.  ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3f1ad0d55680,21A162D4B0CB,"While some say that the Electoral College goes against America's democratic ideals and it increases the probability for a disastrous vote, the Electoral College still gives Ameican citizens some sway in the election and with a completely democratic system of voting there is a good chance that the outcome could be even more disastrous. ",Position,Effective,,,
+302e7b5df753,21A162D4B0CB,The Electoral college is a compromise of voting between citizens and the government ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8147400a0c94,21A162D4B0CB,it represents the people as evenly as it can ,Claim,Effective,,,
+86b525910a0f,21A162D4B0CB,it still gives voters a collective chance to change the outcome of an election. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+14bbacbe4758,21A162D4B0CB,One reason that the Electoral college works so well is that it is not completely run by the people or run by the government. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+175d9c659295,21A162D4B0CB,"Rather both are part of the voting process, having equal representation.  While democracy is highly regarded in America, it would be unwise to have a vote completely run by the people.  The government needs to have some system in place that gives citizens a vote, but not complete free reign.  If the people of America voted and the election outcome was disastrous, then the government needs to have a scapegoat in place.  The founding fathers understood this which is why the Electoral College is still in place today. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+536e94ee7f03,21A162D4B0CB,"The Electoral College does not give a single voter a chance to sway an election, however America's population as a whole is represented. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b24f56515cbe,21A162D4B0CB,"Not one region or state has enough electoral votes to elect a president (Par 19 and 21).  This is a good thing because canidates pay equal attention to all of America's people.  Also, in the Electoral College, not every state has the same amount of electoral votes because every state has a different population size.  ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a802dbaac5e4,21A162D4B0CB,This might seem like unequal representation of that states ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+149b8228e493,21A162D4B0CB,"but the election is not meant to give each state an equalized vote, it is meant to give the population of america an even representation. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+2f89be82b64f,21A162D4B0CB,Swing states give America's people a chance to decide an elections outcome. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+892d91bf3885,21A162D4B0CB,"In swing states the voters are very thoughtful about their canidates because they know that in the their case, that their vote really does count (par 20).  It is good to have voters who are very thoughtful and catious about their vote.  The Electoral Colleges encourages this type of behavior among citizens by giving voters a chance to sway an  election in swing states.  Swing states can impact an election.  They are an example of how the Electoral College, while still not completely democtratic, still gives the people a vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+50a4fb312c20,21A162D4B0CB,"Through the Electoral College America's population is represented, the government and it's citizens have equal representation, and American people can still impact the outcome of an election.  The founding fathers of America thought of this while they created the foundation that our country proudly stands on.  The Electoral College should stay as it is.  It still works effectively to decide on who will become president.  As long as the College works effectively, then ther should be no issue with it.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+64301802342a,21C30597D17F,"I'd like to take some of your time to shed some light on the matter of having popular vote for the president of the United states.""We the people "" ,That stands strong in our society and I'd like it to stay that way.Majority of the people,Thats what its about.Over 60% have voted to have popular vote to elect our president.Thats over half,and numbers speak.Yes,The electoral college has its good but over all bad,There is so much trust put into each states electors and some voters dont even know it. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2d8d921f2aa0,21C30597D17F,The number one fault in the electoral college is the electors themselfs ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4980aa2d39c7,21C30597D17F,"Most voters get confused and have no idea how the electoral college works,better yet that we vote for our electors.The electors we do vote for by chossing the canidate by popualor vote,sometimes dont vote for their party .(The majority of the states residents) ,That means who the people wanted they arent even promised the vote for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+364244c610e3,21C30597D17F,"I understand the good in the electoral college though.It helps keep states from tieing ,and causing chaos. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3a836d18e373,21C30597D17F,"But,We the people do not have our justice in that manner.If the winning vote is casted by state the legislatures are techinally responsible for picking the eletors in favor of the vote. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+10095a354918,21C30597D17F,"Then when it comes time to fairly make their votes for us,the people who voted ,They can change their minds if they like an vote for the least liked canidate running for office by Florida is they wanted too! Thats ridicoulous and has no justice.The winner takes all system is very faulty and unfair. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cb44edbf52d,21C30597D17F,"If we want to keep America fair and keep our pride in our country we should most defaintly start electing our presidents by popular vote,instead of relying on an out dated system that has many faults and injustce ",Position,Effective,,,
+4d0d0938edff,223370B9F564,I have been told that you are deciding whether you should give your students community service ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6ad9838d958b,223370B9F564,well i think you should only give your students community service is if they did something bad. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+45016160aa38,223370B9F564,"Community service is really for people who have did something bad, but also you can volunteer to do it for your community, just to help your community stay clean and nice. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b20782db8150,223370B9F564,People shouldn't think that doing community service wastes your time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+315a4e578d57,223370B9F564,"it doesn't, you need to do something positive in life, you should be glad to do something positive. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6ed39261bf81,223370B9F564,"If you're an adult, and you did something bad and you had to go talk to an elementary school, I would tell them not to do what I did because they wouldn't wont to be in situation I'm in, so then they would no not to do bad stuff when they grow to be an adult. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9954ef9b79d,223370B9F564,"I believe that some people don't want to do community service because they think somebody would see them out there, and they would start laughing at them and they'll get mad. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0be30021f92,223370B9F564,"It would be good to start community service at a young age, so you will have that care in you throughout your life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d83a72cf7794,223370B9F564,"TEACHER_NAME, if your students thinks it takes to much time of there day, so be it, I'll let the students that really want to and care about there community. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0c996cb5f4f3,22407ED964AB,"There has been a lot of talk going around about if you're going to decide to require community service or not. So, I decided to write this letter to you hoping it will make your decision a little easier. I would agree, that there is a lot of controversy over this issues. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2e2efb8cfc31,22407ED964AB,My opinion on this issue is to require community service to all of the students of our school ,Position,Effective,,,
+7a7622a207e6,22407ED964AB,"Community Service is just helping out the community, but its also helping out helping the person doing the service ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+542e549d462c,22407ED964AB,"The individual student may not realize it, but community make the place THEY live in a better society. If it didn't it would be called, world service. Everyone doing a little bit can make a big impact in our community. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d252a9c68df,22407ED964AB,"Some students may say ""but, I just don't have time"". ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+be1464dda209,22407ED964AB,In most cases this is a lie. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0367bf9d787c,22407ED964AB,"What these kids are saying is, on a rough estimation, in 3,600 hour school year the don't have just 10 hours of that time to give back to their community? I find that pretty hard to believe, and I hope you would to. I have to agree that students lives are very full these days, but the can make time for their community that makes there lives full. On my opinion on refusing to do community service is either the person is lazy, or just plain mean. The students may not realize it not, but community is definitely worth their time. After doing community service, the students will have a satisfying feeling, knowing they did something good, and benefited their community. You never know, they just might like community service. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40d76c913685,22603B44E550,"The Electoral College is ""unfair,outdated,and irrational"". if the Electoral College is unfair why should should the U.S keep this process in our goverment? who really knows? But on the other hand popular votes is a great way to keep voteing fair and rattional to the U.S citizens ",Position,Effective,,,
+5adb7f211885,22603B44E550,"First of all,their are many reasons popular votes are way more usefull and fair then the Electoral College ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dd50227fc310,22603B44E550,"say one canidate gets 80 percent of the U.S votes but the other candiate wins because of Electoral College vote it just makes no sense. a large anount of americans are considering the Electoral College vote the diaster factor the reasons for that their are many to say such as unfair,outdated,and irrational and much more.""it can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a canidate who has no hope of of carrying their state"". that qute demostrates how some people dont even vote because the Electoral College gives no hope to some potential voters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f0172c9b1d9,22603B44E550,"Second of all,popular votes are more logical and sensefull then other voting stratigies. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+79d872327abd,22603B44E550,to most ameriacns it just makes more sense to use popular voteing procsess then the Electoral College because they actaully have say in the potential president. if potential voters are not voteing because the Electoral College then why have it? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1518f9633986,22603B44E550,"the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in wich no canidate recevies a majority of the votes"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+42e293d5085c,22603B44E550,this quote explains how canidates can not get majority rule over the other canidate. Electoral College should be replaced with majority rule ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+09d4726f455a,22603B44E550,"On the other hand, Electoral College avoids the run-off elections,""the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ab00f2755334,22603B44E550,"""this quote  explains how Electoral College makes the voteing process easier and has less pressure on canidates and voters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d5b5c4fd688,22603B44E550,also the Electoral College restores some of the weught in the polyical balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apprtioment of the senate decreed in the constitutuion ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8afb3c3ee639,22603B44E550,"last,popular votes/majority rule are in all a better way of voteing in the U.S because of the fairness and rights the U.S citizens all deserve,yes the Electoral College votes are easier but in the end who really wins? noboby does ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7449f801322d,22B0E90D524E,I think all students should have a certain amount of hours on community service to do each week. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c0fe0c4bb4e8,22B0E90D524E,Even if some kids say they are busy they should have to get the hours in for a grade. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+82cd3c8e65da,22B0E90D524E,Most students these days don't help out enough or anything and they need to learn how to help up the community so when they get older they can volunteer to do something like help the community out. I am a student and i think they should make kids to community service not just by kids volunteering i think they should make everyone do it and not by getting in trouble by the cops neither. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4f7c16a4736a,22B0E90D524E,They should have it as if you fail any of your classes you get more community service and then if you don't get the community service is results in bigger punishment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14c96f3fe4d5,22B0E90D524E,They should net let students bring cell phones to school because it is a distraction from class and that results in bad grades. Another thing is when you go home your parents should check you to see if you have any homework instead of asking the student because most of the time they will say no because they do not want to do the homework or and wanna do something else instead of homework. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+799b933a0e58,22B0E90D524E,I think the school should have uniforms because people cant make jokes on someone else because of what they are wearing. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0e957e7e5e70,22B0E90D524E,My old school we had to wear uniforms so no-one really made jokes on them for what they are wearing. Its worse to bring a cell phone to school because when you bring it to school its a distraction from class and if you where to be texting in class and get caught and the teacher wants to take your phone sometimes a student will refuse and that will get them more in trouble or the student will give them the cell phone but throw the teacher a attitude and if you are texting in the hallways and knock someone over or fall its your fault for texting in the hall ways they should of left the phone at home or put it in there lockers so they wouldn't get in trouble or i took. Kids should only need cell phone incase of a emergency and like someone gets kidnapped or break in the school the kids can call 911 if they are in trouble. And if someone crazy comes in to the room if a kid has a cell phone they can call the cops or someone for help. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee6535fd1cc2,22BB7EEA0475,"Humanity believes this land structure is a face left by aliens, we will never know. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+6696a2f03fe9,22BB7EEA0475,"We have to find out and learn. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3542b08a09e5,22BB7EEA0475,"People have questions about this ""face"" on the moon, what does this mean, what next, how did this happen.
+
+That will remain a mystery.
+
+We have seen strange objects in the sky, strange ""ships"" and UFO's and what not.
+
+But we have never had any proof that aliens exist.
+
+we have never seen one, captured one or anything.
+
+But we also have never seen them in space.
+
+These mysterious objects on the moon are just a coincedince.
+
+Until we have proof that we have captured, seen, or caught on camera a extraterestrial thing we cannot say this object was made by aliens.
+
+This land structure could be a manmade structure and we would never know it.
+
+We would never know if othe people made a trip to the moon.
+
+Till we have proof this was not a human manmade structure, it will be a mystery till it is prooved.
+
+There ar thousands of craters, dents and all kinds of odd looking things on the moon, what makes you think this could be made by someone or something.
+
+It will remain a mystery till we know who or what did it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+55009ff766fd,22ECC2FD37EE,"If i was to be voted for president i would like to be voted by Electoral College because , electoral college is not voted for the presidents it is voted for the electors , who in turn elect the president . In conclusion , each candidate running for president in your state has thier own group of electors. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+37a248d309c7,22ECC2FD37EE,There are somethings wrong with the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+097cf6c52aba,22ECC2FD37EE,american people dont consider themselves lucky with any election that happens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7042dd9e0301,22ECC2FD37EE,Americans are not grateful cause they might not have wanted the same president or wanted different electors. If you wanted to be president and you had good electors people all over the world would vote for you just because the electors you got. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+24f120d14f17,22ECC2FD37EE,"Americans vote for you to get the electors , i believe that is not good for our state because the electors of the president can switch the statements of one another ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4bc0b1cc3513,22ECC2FD37EE,"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The electoral is Abolish ! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fd803a2317d,22ECC2FD37EE,At the most basic level the electoral college is unfair ! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d5e7279a734,23011CDB368B,I believe we should have policy one ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac178e35afd5,23011CDB368B,Policy one seems fair enough for everyone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c8c910598a0,23011CDB368B,"because it allows you to use your phone at lunch and free periods (passing period) and some students might need to use their phone in case of an emergency. Some students use phones anyways when it is not even allowed on the campus. In my opinion kids should be able to use phones as long as it is on vibrate or silent and they cant disrupt other kids or play music. I think they can use it in classes for a calculator or a timer, etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d7d090aec0d,23011CDB368B,"Policy two you cant even use the phone at all. I think each school that's thinking of having phones should do a vote with the parents and students, and have students write an essay on why they should have phones and if twenty out of one hundred students have a convincing essay about phones then they should be able to have there phones during lunch and passing periods. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fccab2c8a949,23011CDB368B,If this rule is abused then we get one warning then another warning and finally just not be able to have phone at all the third time you tell us to not have phones out during class ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0475cf164d7d,23011CDB368B,A lot of kids don't follow the rules at school but maybe if you let them have the privilege of having their phones they will end up becoming more responsible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c86e701fd6c,23011CDB368B,I hope that we will be able to use phones at school and if we aren't able to have the phones at school right now than at least consider it later in the years. In my opinion and other kids opinions we believe that we should be able to have our phone during school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a72479457f7d,233A9C9D748F,"In this essay I will be talking about the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars."" The face was not created by aliens it is a natural landform. I have a lot of evidence for my claim.
+
+They all prove that it is a natural landform. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5a58b18a462d,233A9C9D748F,"The Face on Mars is just a natural landform.
+
+It was not created by aliens. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0e8cb59400cf,233A9C9D748F,"""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bd30f7dffa0,233A9C9D748F,"it was describes as a “huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.” ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6aa2fcc5c707,233A9C9D748F,"""We just don't pass over the Face very often."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ecf8d2a758a,233A9C9D748F,They thought is was made by aliens because they usually don't see this face ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+bbd48ea5ef22,233A9C9D748F,"Now that they know it is a natural landform they will always see it. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1acf08412cfa,233A9C9D748F,"In conclusion we can prove that the Face in Mars is just a natural landform. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9228e564dd78,233A9C9D748F,"At the beginning everyone thought that aliens made this. ""It has been shown in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows—even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6c9d586357e,234C54F93ABC,I would like to put my opinion about students being required to perform community service. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ee134f62718e,234C54F93ABC,I believe community service would have good looks on to our schools. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+16de2eb7a9d3,234C54F93ABC,Also it would make our students look like they want to help and change the world ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d95158cb32cd,234C54F93ABC,Actually make it a better place for the children that live in the area. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31338175653e,234C54F93ABC,Community service can help the students that are in high school get into colleges. It can help the students be able to choose what college they want to go to not what college they have to go to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8df3fa4572f2,234C54F93ABC,"To the older people the younger people may take out the trash for them, mow their lawns, etc. If that would happen this world would be an better place. A place where everyone would get along and peaceful. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6e0c75f61f0a,234C54F93ABC,Also the students would actually be communicating wit each other ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7e62e340759,234C54F93ABC,"Having fun, making new friends would be amazing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+250b9697289a,234C54F93ABC,The only thing that may be wrong about it is the whole work time. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6e64f130ca68,234C54F93ABC,You have to know how to manage to keep your grades up and be able to perform in community service. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3386aef197ca,234C54F93ABC,I strongly believe community service should be required for elementary school students and up ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1cc69b7f245c,236ACE5E8FC3,"Okay hey,  I just wanted to introduce myself before we get into this subject my name is PROPER_NAME and i'm writing about changing the Electoral College to election by popular vote. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+10781991f684,236ACE5E8FC3,The reason why I am writing about this is because there are a lot of things wrong with the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c913790cc902,236ACE5E8FC3,"under that sytem, voters don't vote for presidents they vote for slate of electors who then elect the president and can elect someone completely different than who the voter wanted to be president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+caeed6260f60,236ACE5E8FC3,So there is a possiblity that your not going to wind up getting what you wanted out of the outcome. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+27e5dca938eb,236ACE5E8FC3,Also in electoral vote the most worrying thing is the prospect of a tie. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c465b02cc0e,236ACE5E8FC3,"In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where the state delegations vote on the president. (The Senate would choose the vice-president on that outcome.) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+74af5432c590,236ACE5E8FC3,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to the voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fb559fe17cc,236ACE5E8FC3,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in the states they know they habe no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode ISland and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it..... ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+136568de9e9b,236ACE5E8FC3,"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. THe best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the argument in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elsections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolsih the electoral college! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09337d4d6652,2375E96B7653,"I think that my school and I should be required to do community service. I also think it should be a choice for students to say whether or not they want to do it, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5755a31f6efe,2375E96B7653,like putting out a flyer or asking if they would like to help clean it up or something to that nature. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+debd67a190ee,2375E96B7653,"The reason i think this way is because some students i know, including me does litter and don't think nothing of it, and its not a good thing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+870569e2bcf1,2375E96B7653,but then again we are 8th grade students and yes we know right from wrong but some students don't mature like others. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4fb545a9d09,2375E96B7653,"And I know a lot of people that wouldn't help. But if u asked me I would be more than happy to help pick up around the community. Sometimes I pick up things and my friends ask me why I'm doing it, and it kind of offends me but i just roll with the roll. So that might be an reason why some students don't want to help out, because they think it is uncool or their to cool to be picking up litter after others. And i can come up with many more reasons why some student wouldn't help. But i have to stay positive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba276feae0cd,2375E96B7653,"i do think that student should be required to pick up litter around the community, but my thinking has a limit. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5ac96190ffcc,237968EDE68A,"I think community service should not be a requirement ,but strongly suggest it to the students. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ab243c76df38,237968EDE68A,I think if you want to do it as a whole school put it in a field trip. If you're the principal of a public school you should go to a big public area and split the kids into groups. If you're the principal to a small private school with around one-hundred kids go to a public park. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc5edacd78d4,237968EDE68A,I go to a small private school and we did it last year. I found it alright because I were with my friends and we were talking and making jokes the entire time. Plus we played on the playground when we were done. As strange as that sounds it was a ton of fun. And where we went was a small zoo so I got to look at animals too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29b9e1f43010,237968EDE68A,"I remember when we walked there I was playing with my plastic bag and I popped it. I figured out how to fix it by tying it. It wasn't a big rip so I could tie a knot by it to close it up. I certainly had better field trips but it was alright. I hope you use this idea for your school. At a public school I'm not sure how well this will turn out. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e22cef807b3d,237968EDE68A,"
+For a public school you might have to make it a requirement. I think you should hand out sheets to the students and have them write down the hours they did and have the person who was in charge sign it. Oh yeah also have them have a requirement of at least ten hours a semester. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29f553e5d154,237E08ECC729,"How does the Electoral College affect the selection of the presidency and is it a positive force? Many may answer ""No."" or ""I don't know."" to these questions, only doing such because that's what they've been or what they've heard others say. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f29b05201997,237E08ECC729,"While many have negative feelings, or no feelings at all, towards the Electoral College, it is a very useful force in electing the President because of its ",Position,Effective,,,
+19e4a787d0a9,237E08ECC729,certainty ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7e21fbff91c,237E08ECC729,"its transregionality, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6db18c62f762,237E08ECC729,"and it lets ""the most thoughtful voters"" (Posner Source 3) decide the election. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+58f567c24211,237E08ECC729,"And in turn voters in these states will definitely receive ""the most information and attention from the candidates"" (Posner Source 2). Voters from these states at the end of the campaigns will no doubt be the most informed voters in the nation, giving them the right to decide the fate of the election for the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3dd5e0bf2f4d,237E08ECC729,"While popular voting can be skewed naturally to one region or another due to their preferences and populations, the Electoral College ensures that one region can't win a campaign alone. If the President was to win due to popular vote and only because of regional appeal, ""residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised..."" (Posner Source 3) and that their president will not best represent everyone's interests. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+feb3b714e142,237E08ECC729,"Although there was one ""fiasco"" in 2000, as Bradford Plumer calls it in Source 2, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b3918f01e4d6,237E08ECC729,"the chance of this happening is very small since ""even a very slight pulrality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state."" (Posner Source 3) For example, in 2012, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of electoral vote while he recieved only 51.3 percent of the popular vote.(Posner Source 3). A 1.3 percent from a tie is much, much more close than the 11.7 percent that that the Electoral College gives us. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ba144864e639,237E08ECC729,"While some may still believe that the Electoral College is outdated and unneccesary, the usefulness of the swing states, its transregional approval system, and its certainty over popular voting proves it to be the best method of selecting our presidents for now and for the future.                    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+17ddb1c7d6de,2396B6BC4F67,I think we should change the election by popular votes for the President of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b6401e3c794f,2396B6BC4F67,"It's a more accurate process and who knows what people running for office has up there arm. The electoral college voting has a repeated tendancy to vote for the state of electors and that way they end up voting for the President. People prefer to vote for exactly who and what they choose to vote for and Electoral college isn't the way to go for it. What would happen when we run out of electoral votes just stick and choose a President? In what world is that fair and accurate? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c557575207f9,2396B6BC4F67,"Popular votes will actually help the voters voting and it might even be a faster process, whose to say, it could even be better. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fd63ebf7e30,2396B6BC4F67,"People aren't voting for President anymore which is the most important person in the senate, besides you the right hand man. The Citizen's voting are starting to vote for the state electors do to where they originate or live in. Citizens have not yet grasped the rules of voting and tend to vote unfairly and not for the real reasons we urgently need these people in house,senate, or office. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e07cf4de445,2396B6BC4F67,In some states electors refused to even vote for their particular party's candidate  and choose to vote for who ever they wish to vote for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6b4dc62efe8,2396B6BC4F67,which is a good thing. these electors prefer to vote for whoever will do a better job in office and that's what were scoring for with popular votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+759b98d0c3eb,2396B6BC4F67,"What happens to votes when there's a run off, because there isn't enough votes to be held accountable for? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ff7e3743bb6a,2396B6BC4F67,"Thats a question to think about , because there could be a lot of problems to be the cause of it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+987f790a8f3c,2396B6BC4F67,To have a certain number of people vote for who they choose to be President is surprisingly unrealistic. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7bd61095afa4,2396B6BC4F67,"Why choose the majority rule when you could have thousands of People praying for a change vote for a change in their their future for a better life. The ""winner-take-all"" system has to be the most challeging systems of them all but seems to work out after all. ""Electoral College is the best way!"" what happened to the People actually living off of the rules that the Electoral college Voters choose for the people all together? It's time to make a change, why not start now and see how the congress feels. The biggest Decision that should be made should be made fairly by the people, the citizens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d11f4a6042b,2396B6BC4F67,"In paragraph 13 it even states ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+688d3118c687,2396B6BC4F67,Big States are the main key. If we could get the big states to take part in the Popularity vote the smaller states will join in. Hoping for the best the Popularity Votes will soon rise and all the discrepencies won't be needed. If you understand where I'm coming from you'll think about what I'm saying if you care about the citizens your trying to help out.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e9dea8217d9d,23A3812CE15F,Right now there are many disputes and arguments over wether or not to keep the electoral college ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4c8aabcbdcee,23A3812CE15F,"I think that the electoral college should have less power, but not be totally rid. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f18e38887940,23A3812CE15F,"Reason for my opinion is that alot of times the electoral college has too much say, and we the people dont have enough say ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ccc9e570382,23A3812CE15F,"For example, Barack Obama recieved 61.7% of the electoral vote compered to 51.3% of the popular vote. The electoral college had the most say and impact upon the outcome of the election ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+379b2aab7c35,23A3812CE15F,Most of the time electoral college makes mistakes on who they pick. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76dfb7fefff4,23A3812CE15F,Everything they say is based of an intellectuall standpoint. The pick shouldnt be based off of all intellectuall. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b9cd4330bf2d,23A3812CE15F,"That doesnt mean the electoral college is bad, if it werent for them I think we the people are too stupid to make the decisons just ourselves. we need intellectual. Most voters dont even know much about who they pick. We shouldnt be trusted with all of the say in the election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5b855faa0b7,23A3812CE15F,Thats why we need electoral college to balance it out and make it right in the end. Alls im saying is dont give them all the say in who wins the election just lower it a bit to be 50-50. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+edd1ccbde036,23CC3629CEC0,I know you are trying to decide if all students should participate in community service. I am writing this so you have a better point of view of a student ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+dee139592dd5,23CC3629CEC0,I think we should have to do some kind of community work ,Position,Adequate,,,
+784afed3311f,23CC3629CEC0,"because it could help us students have a better look into life, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d5e6c6427f4a,23CC3629CEC0,have a better appreciation of what you and teachers do for us ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ed53622f1856,23CC3629CEC0,and we can kind of learn what we want to do when we're older. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fcd95213677f,23CC3629CEC0,I know that most of the other students probably don't want to have that happen. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e5af9a7f95b7,23CC3629CEC0,Now you know at least one student wants it. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2a7449b8fb21,23CC3629CEC0,is we could help younger kids like teachers do and might want to become a teacher in the future. We could also use the experience as we get older in jobs or with our own life style. this like a prospect that we use to our advantage. It could help some us be less likely to become criminals. It will probably be one of the best things that could happen to certain students. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b47288a27aaf,23CC3629CEC0,because we can better see how hard you work with us. Then we can behave better during school and not be like delinquents all the time. I know your probably having a lot of doubt about this and us as your students should be happy with what ever you decide to do ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3241ed8e3628,23CC3629CEC0,is that we could become professional tuters or want to be sometung ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6ba363ecdaf,23E182BD3084,I feel that you should change to the popular vote for the President of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fcc44e9520de,23E182BD3084,That way they people can really choose who they want to be president instead of the government having to jump in and help the people choose who they want as president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d09d04d58c86,23E182BD3084,some people dont vote because they know it doesnt matter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9ee542e916e,23E182BD3084,"With Electoral College the voters don't vote for a president, they vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+30891416149f,23E182BD3084,"For example the Jhon Kerry ''voting'' if you were in Texas you voted for a slate of 34 Democratic electors that pledged to John Kerry. The Electoral College is a process that makes voting easier for the government. They have to select electors, then they all have a meeting to vote for the President and Vice President, and then the counting of the eletoral votes by congress. It consists of 538 electors. But a major of 270 electroal votes in order to elect the President. Another example John F. Kennedy had a popular that vote would have went to him. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9681a5665a8e,23E182BD3084,"The Electoral college is unfair to voters,because of the winner-take-all system in each state, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7d2c3fc1651,23E182BD3084,"the candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, which focuses only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. It as become unfair,outdated,and irratonal. The electoral college is widely regared as an anachronism. We are in need of a change because this has been going on for years and years. So why not change it up i think it should have been done a while ago but it never to late. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c85c04251b90,23E182BD3084,The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc16b7aed7e7,23E182BD3084,"Which is not every fair some people are'nt as rih as others so they sould'nt descrimate people by the way they look or dress. Because for all you know they look gurst so your not going to try and listen or understand where they came from. But they could be President material they just dont have the outter look, that everyones looking for.""Don't judge a book by it cover."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff5f408269aa,23E182BD3084,"The swing states go through the most with the electoral college,because its a winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates as seen in election. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a733d2505f23,23E182BD3084,Voters in toss up states are more likely to payclose attentionto the campaign. They get the most feed back for the government. Also they get attention from the candidates as while. The bigger states dont get much attention. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+039b9c7d80da,24122D3D3AED,"I think that the newly proposed rule may have advantages and disadvantages. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+48176fee0b33,24122D3D3AED,"It will ensure that only those who are willing to do the work and try hard will appear on the sports teams and academic groups, bettering the program. Yet I also feel that this pushes the boundaries of the 'no pass no play' rule very far. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1edf12da319d,24122D3D3AED,"I think that students should have a choice in this yet I can't help thinking that this would help solve problems, so i am forced to vote for this new rule. ",Position,Effective,,,
+4df7faac3232,24122D3D3AED,those who aren't willing to do the work in order to compete obviously don't care much or they would aim for that higher grade and try harder. This will teach them a valuable lesson in life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a5f5348fd1cf,24122D3D3AED,"Think, what would happen in your life as an adult if your boss told you that he needed you to do something he needed done. Many would say yes in order to please their boss. those who are not willing to work hard to do what even extra activities would probably not be willing to put out the effort for a job. what happens then? You are fired! This would show them to put more effort in order to succeed. the newly proposed rule is a wonderful idea, and will eventually provide the educational system with a higher amount of success in individual schools. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6034d0ec62b7,24122D3D3AED,"i believe this could be a quite useful rule and cast my vote for the rule of no students participating in extra activities without an average of 79 or above. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+839eaa89ba1e,2421208F6A6E,I think that you should let the students bring there cell phones to school and let them use it during free and at lunch ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0e9701e24c90,2421208F6A6E,So you should use policy1 cause if you don't then their going to bring them so many times ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3f8b0526d67,2421208F6A6E,It would be better like that. Because everyone will love using their phones with out having to sneak it even at lunch or in the morning. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82e83f37bfcf,2421208F6A6E,You really should do that but don't get angry if they forget to turn off their cell phones cause a lot of kids always forgets i do. And so does my friends ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd6345966e85,2421208F6A6E,Also i would use policy 2 cause no one would for get to turn off their cell phones ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3d38504c3257,2421208F6A6E,But they would be making explanation to have their phones ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1292c94a45a7,2421208F6A6E,"So i would pick policy 1 but if their using it in class then i would take policy 2 to teach them a lesson. I wouldn't care if they got mad serve them right. So remember always be fair especially if it's about phones everyone again I'm going to say everyone loves their phones. I would take in to consideration that you would select policy 1 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ed0e7eb11455,2421208F6A6E,"Please pick policy 1 cause kids won't have to sneak phones to lunch in the morning or in class you would be doing all of us a favor. Also maybe they would pay more attention in class just maybe. It would be good for the school, for the district and for the students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c549cb96dc57,243ED18B29C0,I would like to comment on your recent school policy that stated that students must have at least a B average to participate in sports or other activities. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+35d561a3ded2,243ED18B29C0,I believe that this policy will help higher the amount of B average students because many people do enjoy playing a sport or another activity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+aee7094c3943,243ED18B29C0,Students go above and beyond their usual school habits and they will have to study hard and work to get the B average. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f4ce6a9fbb96,243ED18B29C0,"There are some students that even though they try their hardest, they will not be able to get the B average because of their inability to work at a high level. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+483d9005a5e2,243ED18B29C0,"If this is the case, then the school must provide extra help classes and study sessions with the teachers to make sure that the kids have the opportunity to play for a sports team or participate in any other school activities. If this policy were to go into effect today, then you would see a huge spike in student's grade point average. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ccfccc00453,243ED18B29C0,There are students that would go the extra mile to be on a sports team or join other activities. These students will seek additional help if they do not believe they can maintain B averages ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+74818e998998,243ED18B29C0,". On the downside, there will be a few students who will not want to work to get the B average and they will not participate in sports or other activities. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+dfbaef961d14,243ED18B29C0,This could cause the sports teams to become less talented then they were before because some of the talent might not care enough to try and get the B average. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e268509c7a29,243ED18B29C0,"But, if you would like your students to try and work more efficently and coopretively, then this policy could be the right the thing to enforce in the school. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7c198db4436f,243ED18B29C0,". It may be because they are not very good test takers or their study habits are very poor. Some might not be able to concentrate and they get distracted very easily. It would be unfair for these students because of their inability to maintain the B average. The school would be responsible for not letting these kids participate in sports and other activities; therefore, in order to give them a better chance at getting the B average, the school should provide tutoring and extra help sessions for the kids who really need the help. The teachers could give them verbal quizzes on what they are learning if they are not very good test takers. They could give them homework that they might better understand and also provide them with extra credit opportunites. The sports teams may despretley need a kid that is very athletic, but not very smart and if this policy were to go into effect, then the school must provide the additional help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc2f74189f06,243ED18B29C0,"In conclusion, I believe that this is a very fair and reasonable policy. It will force kids to work out to their full potential, and they will have better grade point averages. The students must fully accept their responsibilty to live up to this potential so that the students, faculty, and coaches will be satisfied with the students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f6c9c380ab06,24687D08CFDA,"Wow, from the mar really look like humans face. It have eyes,nose, and mouth. It weird that on mar there is nothing and it shape like that is really weird. Most people think there is alien who live there do. They say it maybe it for living thing for alien. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1e92e35b66b2,24687D08CFDA,I think it just a natural land form because there is no alien monument. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f14079cb3ee1,24687D08CFDA,"First, The face of the mar really is popular for other. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2416eb2112b4,24687D08CFDA,"It even appear on hollywood film, books,magazines, and radio. Maybe it just not close enough to see if it flat or it like mountian. It show a lot of stuff going on on mar. Mar is really history for people in may 24,2001. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+097a1251f2d6,24687D08CFDA,"Next, I think it just natural land form because on the shadow it look like pyramid ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9ab8f236c52c,24687D08CFDA,If you look at the shadow and you can see it not it have to much pointing on the top. The eyes waht they call it might be the whole for some water. the mouth can be just a crack on it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+107f4705f728,24687D08CFDA,"Finally, if we can go look closer scientist NASA might catural n tell. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a158616a9a4,24687D08CFDA,They just look at the front they won't know how it shape like to look side to side. Scientist NASA will have to look closer so they can tell if there is alien or not. It depend on to look closer. It just landform because it did have no alien monument. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56bd21b22f9b,24687D08CFDA,"Conclusion, this is all about face of mar well it truth, but if you look at the shadow it show only triangle. it will be better for scientist to look closer instead just making up stories about unmasking the face on mar. It just natural for land to have mountain, and there is no such an alien. according to ther text""There was no alien monument after all"". ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b1d0de3a1cc9,24B385AF486F,I think we should be able to have cell phones in our school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7f5765a55372,24B385AF486F,due to the fact that you can see that most 14 or 15 year olds have cell phones and other electronics and so that we wont have to sneak them in anyway ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+751a20b09ceb,24B385AF486F,I mean come on this school gives out psps and ipods and other stuff to us so its like there daring us to bring them to school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+660c2eb7426d,24B385AF486F,It is the 21st century new things are coming out all the time every one has a cell phone or ipod or something you would think that we would be able to take our electronics to school by now ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f50a40332048,24B385AF486F,also don't you see all that violence out there ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b57f702ed09e,24B385AF486F,"IT is always the same thing all the time some crazy person goes to a somewhere and starts shooting up the place like columbine, Virginia tech, and more recently Arizona some one just started shooting the school right now we wouldn't be able to call the cops for help and then you would have yet another tragedy at your hands. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00137d08573c,24B385AF486F,we should be allowed to carry cell phones to school for practical reasons and if the unexpected was to happen. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+16c51d2eb1fa,24BCEBE0EEF1,I believe that the school cell phone policy should be that all students should have their cell phones off at all times at school ,Position,Effective,,,
+0cbdc6a1aeca,24BCEBE0EEF1,because it keeps them focused on their work ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e2b6ea3e46f7,24BCEBE0EEF1,having a cell phone could get them in trouble. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8504341d8956,24BCEBE0EEF1,First of all keeping your cell phone off at school enables students to focus completely on their work. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f907e95240e0,24BCEBE0EEF1,For example if we could have our cell phones out nobody would be thinking of the lesson or would even bother to tune into the class because obviously a phone is a perfect way to chat with your friends while the teacher isn't looking. This makes it difficult for the person sending the messages AND the one receiving them because both are having their attention pulled away from what's important (class) and what's not (socializing). Another example is even if the rule says that cell phones can only be used during free time students will be using them all the time ignoring the rule. Honestly anybody can quickly put the phone under the table and text a quick message to their friend but in that short second the teacher could've been explaining something crucial to the development of the students skills. And just missing that one little thought the student is now behind because of it. As you can see cell phones will be a major disruption to the students if allowed for them to have them in school. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+46013e1eab7f,24BCEBE0EEF1,Second of all having a cell phone will most likely cause you to get in trouble. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4f42bbcb0df9,24BCEBE0EEF1,"I know one of my friends did. He thought he was so slick that he could just take out his cell phone and try to cheat on a test with another person. He asked for the answers to the questions on the test and while he was busy typing it out little did he know that the teacher was watching him the whole time. The teacher had to stop everybody that was taking the test and had to figure out who was cheating. After that his phone was token away from him and was in major trouble. Not only was it not worth it to get in trouble for this but it distracted the whole class and academically took away from everybody's experience. Yet another time that someone got in trouble was when my friend decided to send explicit text messages to his girlfriend. Now if that wasn't bad enough he did it during class, when everybody was watching. Now he didn't caught on his end but when the girlfriend received the message someone heard it and said something. The teacher then confiscated the phone and found the messages. She looked at who sent it and reported it to the office. Both people involved were sent to the office and were in major trouble involving parents and everything. This type of behavior would not be uncommon if the cell phone policy was instituted. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ed8e439450b,24BCEBE0EEF1,In conclusion I think we should have our phones off at all times at school because it keeps us focused on work and it keeps students out of getting into unnecessary trouble. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ec54ad02980f,24E0B6DB7B49,"I think that having the school do community service is a great idea! 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+45354a0f986e,24E0B6DB7B49,It will help clean up our community and help bring the school close together. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a37515ce497f,24E0B6DB7B49,This would be a good thing because if the school is close together then their wont be as many fights. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d0b0bb187bf,24E0B6DB7B49,Even though some students in the school think it would be a terrible idea ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+068d95400533,24E0B6DB7B49,I don't agree with them because they might be lazy and don't care about how our town looks. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ac276eb20a1b,24E0B6DB7B49,If we had school community service we could make Bensalem look like a better place to live. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c37c1f28ef2,24E0B6DB7B49,It would also make our school look good too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+865c65a73b3f,24E0B6DB7B49,And if we had a good looking school then we would be noticed more and people would want their kids to come to our school district. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9c5f3c9bb4b,24E0B6DB7B49,"Another good reason to have community service is so we could help the less fortunate in the area and supply them with food, shelter, clothing, and Etc. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fcd49dab3c9,24E0B6DB7B49,"even if some kids don't want to do it because its ""stupid"" or ""a waste of my time"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c10f172fcb36,24E0B6DB7B49,you don't have to make them do it only the kids that want to volunteer. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+759b78aa8312,24E0B6DB7B49,"I think you should make community service an option to the students because I think it seems like a fantastic idea.
+
+Its a fantastic idea because it make the school look good as long with the community. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+efbeff5986f4,253DB9820B2E,"I honestely think that it should be popular vote instaed of the electoral college. i think that because its going to effect our lives, our way of living, and how our way of life is going to work. If we pick a president then thats who we wanted now what a group of people want. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6e099afbf96c,253DB9820B2E,Having a popular vote is the same thing but with more people and more accurate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5ee338e8b3c,253DB9820B2E,"The way we like to live is the better wa, not being forced on how to live our lives. It is also a faster prosses to vote. If the group all are equal then they have to wait a longer time to see who the presedent is going to be and no one wants that. If i can ask you one question its going to be ""how long will you be willing to wait to see who the new presedent id going to be?"" The people of nthe united states dont want to wait, they want to see who the presedent is going to be the week after they vote.
+
+Can we live the way we want to live
+
+? can we live our lives without something happening that changes everything? Most of the time no, there is always something/someone that changes things in our lives. Like in 2001 the twin towers got hit by a plane, that changed everything. the way we go through airports, the way we fly, the way how people find jobs, and how people look and their beliefs. Some people are judged by what they do for living or what they look like , but thats the point of freedome in the united states. If we have a popular vote in the US they most of that will change and i can garantee that more laws will be fast that will help the US. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a0a2f544d36a,253DB9820B2E,"I'm going to agree with Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole. they all wanted the electoral collede to be abolished. there is no need to have them if we have the people in out states. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+950c48bb31b0,253DB9820B2E,"The people in out states have a big use in voting. without the people then whats the use in being in states why not just one big land. Every state has its own way of voting but the peoples votes really dont mean anything with the electoral college. The electoral college just take over voting and wont let the people oppinions work in voting. Without them our votes will mean something, not just thrown away and just be forgotten. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3efe7d6ecde0,253DB9820B2E,"Most ruls shouldnt just be in texas or california.
+
+They should occure in all states.
+
+why do only two states get special treatment? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bfa75c464cd,253DB9820B2E,If every state had tghe same rulls do you think it would be more fair to all the states? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7caa28cebc8,253DB9820B2E,"If not then i dont know what to say, because im pretty sure in one of the amendmendments it states thats ""every human being will be treated equal no matter what. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1edbd6730a5d,253DB9820B2E,"""So this is my tought on how we should vote and that is by popular vote..    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e1bfda156005,2589CDBE363E,"In the year 2000 there was a presidental election. The two canadate runnning were Bush and Gore. In that election there was a problem, Gore had won the votes of the people but Bush had won the votes of the the Electoral votes. Now the question is asked who should win, should the person who had the most votes from the people win or the person who had the most votes from the Electoral College win? This is something that has been going on for a long time, does the Electoral College over rule the people? This is an importain question that we the people should be asking, do we realy pick the persendent or does the Electoral College pick it and we are just there for show? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+66ee84d87f0d,2589CDBE363E,"The Electoral College is an out dated sistem that we keep because the goverment wants there to be a clear winner, but we know that is not what the people the people want the right to dicide. ",Position,Effective,,,
+1d08b0932083,2589CDBE363E,"The Electoral College was established by the founding fathers and made as a ""compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualifies citizens."" The Electoral College vote on the President and the Vice President. It has 538 members and for there to be a winner a canadate, has to get a majority of 270 electoral votes. Your states allotment of electors is equal to the number of members in its Congressional degation ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc8f8fbcd1e8,2589CDBE363E,The problem here is that there is 300 million people in this contery and only 538 people get to vote on who is going to be president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ef1bbe5bf68,2589CDBE363E,Also most states have a Winner takes all system were the winner of the majority gets all of the votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32ea0291d1d6,2589CDBE363E,For example florida has 29 electoral votes so if one canadate get 15 which is the magority he will get all 29 ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc4260dc872d,2589CDBE363E,Because of this there is not an acurate repisentaion of what the state thinks. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b230bc0a251,2589CDBE363E,The last reason it is not a good system is because the people's votes do not matter ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ebf943b65ce,2589CDBE363E,In the 2000 election Gore had won the peoples votes and Bush had on the Eletoral votes. now Bush became president even tho Gore had won with the people. The biggest problem with the Electoral College is the fact that it over rules the people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d3b55f532e8f,2589CDBE363E,"If the Eletoral College wins it does not matter how many people vote for the other person running it will not matter. Now the question is acked, What is the point of voting if it does not matter who we vote for only the Electoral College votes matter?®                    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9b0e68cfbe85,259706C1BBC3,"The creation of ""smart cars"" is new and exciting, but is it safe? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+11400ebb18a2,259706C1BBC3,"Multiple car companies are working on cars that drive themselves. Tesla claimes that they will release a car capable of driving on autopilot 90% of the time by 2016. Also Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.
+
+Google has had cars that have been on the road independently since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, so far. Google cars arn't truly independent, they are required to have a person in the car to take the wheel in case of simply pulling in or out of a driveway or complicated traffic issues. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a5e157d5d12,259706C1BBC3,"In most states it is illegal to even test the computer driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the Dristrict of Columbia have led the country in allowing the use of semi-autonomous cars. It should be illegal in most states, because it is dangerous. If one of these ""smart cars""
+
+were to crash who is responsible? The driver,the car company, or the state? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96f39c1cbe55,259706C1BBC3,"New laws will be needed to cover liability incase of an accident, in these states before the cars are tested. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+79dfa11db350,259706C1BBC3,"All of these ""smart cars"" that have been created, and are on the road still need a person in the car ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+160470a8893c,259706C1BBC3,Why would someone want a driverless car that needs someone in it? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+814e5a317142,259706C1BBC3,"All these big name car companies are claming to have these ""driverless cars"" soon, but how safe is it going to be for states, and pedestrians on the streets? ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+86aa297a6851,259706C1BBC3,"If these ""smart cars"" are created, states need to make sure that the cars are 100% safe for everyone.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fdbd6f5a798e,259C2BDB1FFF,I think that every student should do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7a844bbc4e47,259C2BDB1FFF,you do this to help the community not to satisfy your self. Community service is to help people in need that is the real meaning of community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8c2a9a35b68,259C2BDB1FFF,Also community service is about doing thing with out receiving and not getting anything back because you do it only to help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22d2f38e45ea,259C2BDB1FFF,"Also another reason of why the principle should make his students do community service is because if they do not do it they will never do any thing for poor or other people, or if they do service hours they won't do it to help they will just do them because their parents told them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd23c1654a92,259C2BDB1FFF,Also the principle should help them see how hard is for other people to live so they will relice that they are lucky have parent or to go to school because there are people who do not have anything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac6b6575f7b6,259C2BDB1FFF,"That is why I think the principle should make his students do service hours, so that they can help others.     ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6f9538010119,259CAA746857,"in my opinion, i would want to keep the electoral college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6b0b5c4e5aa0,259CAA746857,because the electoral college been around since our founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ade325f5bbb5,259CAA746857,it consist of a presidency election on which who wants to be in office. for instance each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. which electors are choosen by the political party. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5b3905304f5b,259CAA746857,you ahhve a right to vote. you can help choose your state's electors when you vote. because when you vote your actually voting for your canidate's electors to help them out. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f19cf26dc8f,259CAA746857,"in your state it shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in december of the election year. but then if you think of its actually wrong because its of how many votes can the electors can get not the president. after the presidential election, your state governor prepares a 'certificate of ascerainment'.
+
+over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we would want to have. this year voters can exspect another close election in which popular vote winner could again lose the presidency, but yet the electoral college has it defenders.
+
+for example like obama had 61.7% of voters against romney who had 51.3% of votes but people say it was a tie which most likely i disagree on that. becuase its a like a win or lose game who ever wins gets the treatment, but really the president doesnt really dont do nothing.           ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+092b37b87526,25A752FB734B,is about what is eletoral college. It's about who is the founding father who established the constitution. And its about which president gets selected to take the offfice. And it depends on which people vote on which president at the time of voting. And after you selected that president there is no going back to change the answer ant any given point when in the voting booth because once you selected your answer there is no way going bak to change it. And you vote every 4 yrs and presidents cant sttay as president after two term if reelected. And the governor prepares a certififcate of ascertainment for all listing canidate who ran for the president that won the election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f1d2998369a,25A752FB734B,"is about the indefensible electoral college:why even the best -laid defense of the system are wrong. Richard Nixon, Jimmy carter,Bob Dole,the U.S. Chamber of commerce,and the AFL-CIO all ,in their time agreed on Aboilshing the electoral college. but electoral college you you dont vote on the president you vote for a slate of democratic or republican elector to pledged for what ever president you want to vote for. But if they take electoral college away it will cause a disaster factor for all american that want to vote. But the american are all lucky that 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21198a25d64b,25A752FB734B,"is about in defense of the five electoral college:five reason to keep our  despised method of choosing the president. The electoral college is widely regarded a an anachronism ,a non-democratic method of selecing a president that ought to be [overruled] by decaring  the candidate who recives the most popular votes is the winner. But each party selects a slate of electorstrusted to vote for the party;s nominee(and that trustis rarely betrayed).Yet that has happend very rarely. There are 5 reason for retaining the electoral college despite its lack of democrat pedigree; all are practical reasons,not liberal or conservative reasons.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cf66e86098f7,25F9B9BAA02A,I argue in favor of keeping the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+22b11035d525,25F9B9BAA02A,"because of the fact that if the popular vote and the vote in congress were to fail, there would be a backup way of casting, counting and recording votes by a qualified group of citizens, as stated in the first paragraph of the prompt ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2a0a8fd258e5,25F9B9BAA02A,"I believe the Electoral College should not be abolished also, for the reason that each candidate for president has an amount of electors chosen, varying on the state laws in effect in the given state he or she is being elected from. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d1abc166aa43,25F9B9BAA02A,"an advantage of the Electoral College is also that the winning presidential candidate is awarded all of the electors in most states, except Maine and Nebraska, stated in the seventh paragraph. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d0d32b070fea,25F9B9BAA02A,"Just like almost anything, the Electoral College has flaws, such as electors can be any person not holding public office, and, dependng on the state, whoever selects electors may vary. Plus, not everyone can control who their electors vote for ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f77dfa284b94,25F9B9BAA02A,"but the Electoral College has been in effect for over 200 years, established by the founding fathers themselves in the Constitution, so why not trust that they knew what they were doing? Besides, when each party selects a slate of electors, they put their trust, which, might I add, is rarely betrayed. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+21d9ac125782,25F9B9BAA02A,"But there is the problem that not all winners of electoral votes will not win the national vote; such an instance happened in 2000, when Al Gore had more popular votes than George Bush, yet fewer electoral votes. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5727047f9b51,25F9B9BAA02A,"Even so, that was the first time since 1888, as said in paragraph 16. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+30722810b2e7,25F9B9BAA02A,"There are a few practical reasons the Electoral College, even though it lacks a democratic pedigree, should be retained. Reason one is a certainty of outcome ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+68a4a2124c19,25F9B9BAA02A,"An example is in the 2012 election, when Obama recieved 61.7 percent of electoral votes, while Romney recieved 51.3 percent of popular votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65fbd7149520,25F9B9BAA02A,"Another example is how the electoral college restores some of the weight in political balance, in which large states, population-wise, lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5aeaed80d3c6,25F9B9BAA02A,"The subject of the Electoral Coolege's method of selecting a president is controversial in the sense that it may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, such as Democrats in Texas, or Republicans in California,when they know their vote will have no effect, their incentive is much less than if it were picked by popular vote ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7acee992d06e,26453BA910DE,"Would you rather be a cockroach or an ant? This isn't in a size match up but a living condition. A lone ranger roach or a society of workers like the ants. The same aspect can be applied to when people ask if offering classes at home would be beneficial for students. Students that would take classes at home would be enclosed away from peers and friends, while a student at school would be surrounded by peers and many people alike. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+734c257e010c,26453BA910DE,"So to a small extent students would benefit from being able to attend class from home, because this would let them learn at their own pace as well as in their best learning technique. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+92ccfc22a577,26453BA910DE,"However, to a greater extent students would be at a loss from taking classes at home, ",Position,Effective,,,
+55a4f76a8c35,26453BA910DE,they would lose their social interaction ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c7ec29e3b20,26453BA910DE,challenges brought on by the environment of schools. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d3a5dc3ce053,26453BA910DE,"Education is about efficiently farming the minds of youth to grow great minds. Without the challenge of competing peers and uncomfortable situations for students the techniques would be less effective. To begin there is evidence to support that students in unfamiliar habitats like a school test better than students that are familiar with their testing environment. So students learning from home would test worse than students at school just due to the simple fact that they are more relaxed in their environment. Continuing, in schools peers push the learning potential upon themselves because of the social hierarchy with grade status. This is a key element with having a generalized system, this system creates competition among students to be at the top. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8b7351b22b06,26453BA910DE,The ability to take classes at home would hinder the students inner strength by proposing no challenge for them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8d51f9f05272,26453BA910DE,"If you never went to school or work, how many friends would you have? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d4085e87b147,26453BA910DE,Students offered classes at home would have minimal social life due in part to the lack of social interaction with the people in their area. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3c9522ce0be7,26453BA910DE,"Students make life long friends from school: college roommates, kindergarten best friend, or high school sweethearts. Taking away the random dice roll of interactions by lowering the rate at which kids interact would create students with minimal social lives and students more likely to become sad or depressed. Students taking classes from home would loose touch with societal standards and become worse adults by not respecting things like: dress codes, rules of the office, or authority figures. This would be because of the lowered interaction with these rules and could lead to people who aren't mentally tough. Students without friends would become lost in society and could be unable to speak about their situation because of their lack of original social interaction. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fccaff401eb4,26453BA910DE,"Students taking online classes could have the ability to learn better, this is because they could learn at their own rate and they could learn with their best suited technique. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d8e8e678ea14,26453BA910DE,"Students aren't all the same, and having one technique used on all can hinder some of their abilities. Students taking online classes could use outside resources for study and this could create the situation best suited for their learning style. This could lead to better retention of the knowledge and a greater understanding of the material. Students could take the course at their speed, this could mean some would finish faster than others, but the main argument in this is students would have better material retention because they would be in the mindset of learning and not just going through the motions of school. Online school has its niche benefits for its population of students willing to take the toll. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cfad9e6fa83b,26453BA910DE,"To conclude students are better off taking classes at school, but there is a small population of students that taking online classes could work better for. Students would have to test out the options first and see what works best. Because even though online school sounds good on paper, it could very well be horrid in practice. Students always want to find the easy way out, and online school could be that no challenge road. That would lead to a greater number of students failing out of rigorous courses, and a potential of uneducated students because of a lower retention of material. Overall students should stay in school because it would create the fun challenging environment and a better social understanding for students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+059d90ae3a9a,264C52745EE1,"I think helping out in the community would be fun.
+
+To me helping people out is a good way for people to get to know you.
+
+It also helps make out world look better! ",Position,Effective,,,
+27aceb1104b8,264C52745EE1,I think you should have the school adopt a road and help pick up trash that people have left behind. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f95c0ea3fc9,264C52745EE1,"It would be great for people to understand that just because people in jail are doing Community Service doesn't mean that its a bad thing to do.
+
+I think if you required us to do Community Service that maybe at first not very many people do it, but i think in the long run a lot of people would join. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a137b4ba5318,264C52745EE1,"Second, i think Community Service would be great because most people in our community that are doing Community Service are the people in jail.
+
+To me when i see people doing Community Service i think of that too.
+
+But if you get more kids to do it, people will realize that, Hey maybe this would be good if all people did this. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7a532f682c4f,264C52745EE1,"Also the air we breathe in wouldn't be as polluted, and if we got together people not in the school district ,but out of our town it would be a lot cleaner. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1310ad0744da,264C52745EE1,"I understand that maybe it might be a bad idea because a lot of kids my age have a lot going on like basketball, baseball, football, school work, and much more. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8a18d1e9b7c9,264C52745EE1,"But i promise if you just did this like once a month when there is nothing going on I'm sure there would be no problem.
+
+Also even if there was a practice on the schedule, the coach for the team or whatever there is a practice for the he/she wouldn't mind them doing some community work. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+33b2400ed4ae,264C52745EE1,"All i have to say, I think this would be good for our community, and you have my vote! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+847d6d8556ed,2689E413844D,I believe that the electoral college should be abolished. ,Position,Effective,,,
+342b063fd68f,2689E413844D,"The system is unjust and prevents we, the people to have our individual voices heard. When americans vote they're supposebly voting for the next president, when indeed they're votes only sway the opinion of the elector. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aab704332fff,2689E413844D,"Think back to a little over a decade ago, to the 2000 presidential elections. Al gore received the popular vote, meaning that he was the one that us, the americans had wanted. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+32cce8c4edb1,2689E413844D,"Due to the fact that George W. Bush, his rival, received more electoral votes, Bush won, leaving an unfavored president running the country. According to source 2, a gallup poll was taken shortly after Gore had lost the presidency, an entire 60 percent of voters would prefer to have a direct vote, rather than go through the electoral process. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7dd817866566,2689E413844D,"Granted, that the electoral college does give a certainty of outcome and that no region on its own can vote for a president, it does give an equal chance for everybody to have their mostly preffered president ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1a516f6e2458,2689E413844D,"there is however some flaws to these so called ""pros"". Faithless electors exist. These electors totally ignore what the people have to say and cast their own vote. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5b3fc9660abb,2689E413844D,"This occured in the 1960's with hawaii and louisiana, and when vice president nixon validated only his opponents electors, he made sure to do so without ""establishing a president"", though it can happen again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9abcfadcd1e4,2689E413844D,"We should all agree with Nixon, carter, and dole on the fact that this system isn't fair. Our voices as individuals aren't heard, and we just vote for the state of electors. We, the people of the united states of America wish to do away with the electoral college.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd072e366aae,269483FFAB82,I think that we should be able to have our phones in school during lunch and free periods. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+448d99cd5d55,269483FFAB82,The reason is what if you had a medical emergency? and didn't have the phone number of that parent?. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+602c0a67a324,269483FFAB82,The policy's you made were very good and if we were aloud to have our phones in school it would make everyone a lot more happy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fc1be4d7ec0,269483FFAB82,The only bad thing to this is that everyone knows that the students keep there phones on and the interruption to the class would be aggravating. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2febcc725a61,269483FFAB82,I'm not saying that having phones during free periods and lunch is a bad thing but it may be in some situations. To be specific they might text during a test or maybe in the middle of class and its embarrassing not only to them but the teacher. The class may think its funny but some people just find it aggravating if this does happen i think that the students phone should be taken away. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de813046ce84,269483FFAB82,"If you do accept this policy i think that you should do some sort of phone check just make five or ten minutes for them to check the phones, or even take the phones from the students and then give them back to them before lunch and during the free periods ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+abca65d45ff7,269483FFAB82,"The reason i like this policy is because we are teenagers and for some people there phone is there lifeline. But for others they have a phone for ""Emergency's""
+
+only which is not always the case. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+faaab289dc9d,269F6428008E,"It a long time ago that a spacecraft discover Mars. there was a lot of things that the spacecraft found on Mars. Mars is a differnet planet away from here. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d39c37e793d0,269F6428008E,"It was twenty five years ago. Thar Mars was discovered by a spacecraft it was going around Mars and found a shadow that looked like a human face and it was getting enormous. The head you could found was from two miles from end to end. The face on Mars is found in 41 degress north martian latitude and also it was winter.
+
+A few days later there was a change that mars is becoming a pop icon ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+338cce6981e1,269F6428008E,Scientist found out that it was a Martian mesa and that those shadows made it look like an Egyptain Pharaoh. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+84b0b4c91b29,269F6428008E,"The Martian mesa just not had a head it also had a mouth,eyes, and a nose like a real human will have. Since the spacecraft discover it. It came out in books,magazines, and radio talk shows. Some people say that there might be life on Mars. The author engage the public to know and attract attention to Mars. For this disover from the spacecraft and the scientist it was hard work to discover Mars Global. The lava dome that is form like a isolated mesa it is the same height as the Face on Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c51bfa36d8a,269F6428008E,So in conclusion there could be life on Mars what scientist and the spacecraft discover. It takes scientist and a spacecraft to find these things in Mars Global. it was hard work for the scientist to learn about the mesa and could there be life on Mars.       ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3e953f69402f,26F5F129E53A,I would like to keep the Electoral College. I think it would be better for the people. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89266c9a289e,26F5F129E53A,"Voters in presidential elction are people who want to express a politcal preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.
+
+The Electoral Collge, ancachronism, a non-demoocratic  method of selecting a president that should be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. The Electoral College method is not democatic in a modern sense. It is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candiate your actully vting for a slate of electors. Our fouding fathers established it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44c24b8825e7,26F5F129E53A,A magority of 270 elctors votes are reqiured. 3 Electors and treated like a state of purpose. Running for president has their own group  of elcetors. Help choose the states electors when you vote for canidate. Governer prepares a Certificate of Ascertanaiment. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c57afb97f186,2710BC110FD2,There are both positive and negative aspects mentioned in having a driverless car. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2c248f9ca72,2710BC110FD2,"While driverless cars seem new and exciting, they aren't practical.
+
+I don't think that having these new cars is a good idea.
+
+I feel like there are a lot better ways to spend our time than trying to develop this car that we don't even need.
+
+We are doing just fine with the cars we have currently. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5cf1cc59be16,2710BC110FD2,"They mentioned that they aren't even completely driverless as of now. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ac676efe98a,2710BC110FD2,"Why do we call these driverless if that's not even true?
+
+We need to stop relying so much on our addictive technology and use our brains and money for more important matters.
+
+In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"", it states that currently these cars still need humans to work.
+
+They are still alerting the driver to take the wheel when necessary.
+
+By calling these driverless it is false advertising.
+
+These cars still need humans to help out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b0dec27acc2,2710BC110FD2,"The cars can't even pull in and out of driveways yet. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d7dcf3f2519,2710BC110FD2,"Shouldn't we spend our time and money on something more worthwhile?
+
+To me, this concept of driverless cars doesn't make a lot of sense.
+
+I don't see the point of owning one of these cars. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f9ffb62e30bc,2710BC110FD2,"It seems incredibly boring just sitting there and not having to drive at all. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ee722eb033c,2710BC110FD2,"Driving helps us learn to focus our attention on the road.
+
+It teaches us how to make responsible decisions. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5922887d9d34,2710BC110FD2,"Driving is a privelege and I enjoy it.
+
+I don't understand why we would want to take this away. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b56d27c9d186,2710BC110FD2,"Kids look forward to getting older and being able to drive.
+
+Now they would learn to be even lazier by sitting there and not doing any work.
+
+Aren't we lazy enough now with all of our technology?
+
+We have phones, iPads, Kindles, computers, laptops, iPods, and so many more things that we put all of our attention in.
+
+Technology is addictive and we have plenty as it is.
+
+We spent countless hours on our devices already.
+
+We've lost contact with actual human beings.
+
+We can't keep relying on our devices to fix all of our problems.
+
+The younger generation doesn't even know what a dictionary or encyclopedia is, let alone how to use them.
+
+Yes, using Google is convenient, but we need to learn how to do things on our own again.
+
+The smarter technology becomes, the dumber we will be. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30ec8b1570b3,2710BC110FD2,"Driverless cars are not a solution.
+
+We can drive just fine as it is.
+
+There are so many causes we could be supporting with the money we are using to fund the driverless car project.
+
+We are perfectly capable of driving on our own.
+
+We should be using our money on things that are more important.
+
+It is selfish to spend all of this money and time on such unecessary ideas than on meaningful corporations.
+
+We could be funding medical research and feeding the poor.
+
+Our generation has gotten so caught up in technology that we tend to forget about what is really important.
+
+In my opinion driverless cars are not a practical idea.
+
+They aren't necessary or completely reliable.
+
+If you got in a wreck in one, it would be blamed on you anyway.
+
+It just seems a lot simpler to stick to the cars we already have. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99782ca26927,2714214F7D9E,I think students should be required to perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+db74e61d8a4f,2714214F7D9E,Community service helps everyone in the community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71675b8f6ec6,2714214F7D9E,Students need to learn how to help their community so it stays nice for everyone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e22c47d447f0,2714214F7D9E,Students need to know how to take care of the environment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be40b0cebd9f,2714214F7D9E,so they stay aware how much work it takes to make the community stay nice and not a bad place to be. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64b84753b096,2714214F7D9E,Students should be required to help the community because otherwise the community could turn into a bad looking place ,Claim,Effective,,,
+549782b21529,2714214F7D9E,no one will want to live there because they don't want to live somewhere no one takes care of or cares about ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01516b94c7e0,2714214F7D9E,Students should be required to help tutor kids so they don't get bad grades so they can get into good schools and have good futures. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee12e5d38b22,2714214F7D9E,Students should help out where help is needed the most like homeless shelters or cleaning up trash around town. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+aecb6256a054,2714214F7D9E,f you pick up trash with a group of people it's fun because you become friends with those people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f06959a228f,2714214F7D9E,Students should be part of an ecology club and work together to make the community healthier. Students could also shovel city side walks in the winter or mow lawns of houses people don't live in or of elderly people. Students can help out at nursing homes or daycares. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51b734d89d9a,2714214F7D9E,Students can help people in there neighborhood by shoveling driveways and helping carry groceries into peoples homes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf5405ce3de2,2714214F7D9E,Community service makes students feel like they accomplished something and feel proud of themselves. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3bc8ddfd68f,2714214F7D9E,Students should start helping others with things they would need help with. Students should start helping others whenever they think someone needs help ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0cef01058ed4,2714214F7D9E,Students should help around their school by picking stuff up in the halls when they see it or taking things that people have found to the lost and found. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+edd9d14adf7b,2714214F7D9E,Students should be required to do community service because some would not volunteer to help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53145e940ea5,2714214F7D9E,because they would be embarrassed because they think they would be made fun of. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73e5579b1f61,2714214F7D9E,Students should have to have community service but be able to choose what to do so that they will want to do it again ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f63915f546e6,2714214F7D9E,because if they don't like it they may never volunteer after that. There should be a lot of options for students to choose from so some people don't get stuck choosing something they think is boring. Students would be more willing if they knew all the options and could find one they liked. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91407e95935b,271636CCA33B,As you know every four years a president is elected. In order for that to happen the candidates go through the process of an Electoral College or the people vote. An Electoral College is when the congress gets to vote to pick who the president and vice president will be. And the other way is when the people of that state get to vote. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+38aa9d2e6a6a,271636CCA33B,some disavantages of doing an Electoral College is if the president is bad the congress will get blammed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+799b589b8636,271636CCA33B,"Vandalism, riots, breaking laws. Who knows how far people will go to get their way. And there are many more mistakes that happen. As said in the article ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+570eaf3b21d4,271636CCA33B,the voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bc44ae4d559f,271636CCA33B,Now there are some disavantages for the people voting but not as many and not as bad. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ebee26b762b2,271636CCA33B,"Yes people can still get angery and do bad things, but due to the privacy when we vote there is no one to speicficly blame. There are way more of us then the congress, so mistakes won't always affect things as bad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d40b759ae57,271636CCA33B,even though there are many many disavantages and mistakes about the Electoral College there are a few advantages. Like it takes less time for the congress to vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7c437c65b54a,271636CCA33B,But to be honest why rush to fail. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5dd8b2b86f1d,271636CCA33B,by letting the people vote it gives everybody a fair chance to say their oppinion and it has so much less conflict. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34f705d48f3c,271636CCA33B,I admit the congress does know alot ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+79a0e180647a,271636CCA33B,"but the decesion on the president is going to mostly affect us, the people. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e3774b3bdd76,271636CCA33B,Everybody has the right to have their own oppinion. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8aaa37062380,271636CCA33B,In my oppinion I think the people should vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+112d1f2d08d8,271636CCA33B,"there are very few things we can do to change things. The congress has power over so much and it it feels like the most people can do is say what we think, even when we know it can't change anything. We the people don't have the power to change much but by letting the people vote it can make a big differnce. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c21af04ddbf,271636CCA33B,"the United States is a great place and no one wants to see it go down hill from one wrong mistake. And the solution is very simple, let the people vote. The people's oppinion are very important and need to be heard! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b38ae86370c4,2723DB12AC00,"Let me ask you this question What's better then waking up and, knowing that you are getting your education at home? with that in mind Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0f24d9209a83,2723DB12AC00,I think students will highly benefit from atending classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cb3170c8e8df,2723DB12AC00,Because not everyone learns the sameway. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf01b5dbe624,2723DB12AC00,"some students struggle to stay in school all day and, most of them can't listen to teachers talking for 90 minutes straight. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e2b3c8a59f3,2723DB12AC00,"I feel like less students will drop out of high school. Some students are anti social and, don't like being in a place where everyone likes to judge you or, talk about you. Students don't have to stressed out about work that is not finished in class so, homework will be a thing in the passed. People like me will have more time to play sports and, be with family. Most people carrey a ten pound backpack but, with online classses all your work will be saved in a computere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16e71790ab91,2723DB12AC00,"The will hightly benefit people who are not the best with keeping papers in order. The future are our computers and, builting a strong skill with computers is a great treat to have. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b1442755186,2723DB12AC00,Online classes is the future and the future is here. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dbac456efee7,2723DB12AC00,"Students are benefiting from online classes but, some students comeback into public schools because they learn better face to face with a teacher, and not steering at a screen all day. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f123e94533d1,2723DB12AC00,Alot of colleges accept students who got their diploma online ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e4d2ccca5af,2723DB12AC00,"but, studies showed that a lot of students who got their education online had a hardtime adopting into the colleges. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a3d09abab90e,2723DB12AC00,I still feel like online classes is the better chioce we been following the same school systeam for more then 100 years It's time for change! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+61f911d1dcf0,27347E260F1C,"First and foremost I believe that we live in a community that is well kept and organized, and it should remain that way. The generations before us have given us a place filled with love and care , a place of neat parks and recreation centers, a place we can call home. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+07f252866bc2,27347E260F1C,This way of life should be kept up and exercised by our generation and the ones seceding us. ,Position,Effective,,,
+5eba94a684ba,27347E260F1C,"Community service gives everyone a chance to give back and help out, whether young or old. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+595ec88ca43a,27347E260F1C,I think that our community should be one of were children offer to help out, ,Claim,Adequate,,
+686c2674551b,27347E260F1C,where the food banks are over filled with volunteers, where people don't hate jury duty, where people are true patriots, where people don't have to get sentenced just to pick up trash. ,Evidence,Effective
+a63a23a96199,27347E260F1C,"I wish that we could be a school with all of those traits.
+
+So yes, I believe in community service being a requirement. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1021988e2b1d,2751851F289B,"If I was a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2b7497afcb48,2751851F289B,in the story it's saids that '' Face on Mars'' has since became a pop icon ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e90b725deb6d,2751851F289B,If I was a scientist in NASA I would found out how did the peron face came to another planet. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0d79b7ce497d,2751851F289B,"They have to get out the earth to come to another planet to just put your face on it out of no were. But if a person did put there face inprint on a another planet, I think they will turn into a alien. I will tell you why I said that, because people say that aliens are real and they harm creatures. Also, if I'm the scientist this will tells that a FACE on a human body doing on a another planet they should be on earth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+088ad588eb77,2751851F289B,"In the article it saids: twenty five years ago something funny happening around Mars, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping photos of possible landing sites for it's sister ship Viking 2 ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc43d8ff92d8,2751851F289B,"Also, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face, an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on the monitors. But now scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa common enough around Cydonia only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eecfdfde2925,2751851F289B,"But if I'm the scientist trying to figured out all this work,and see who's the human face or a alien face because humans on earth an aliens in Mars or more planets. But afterwards after that happening, it saids how some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile the defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars. Also, although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia became a prioprity for NASA when Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in September. 1997, eighteen long years ago after the Viking missions ended. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+455082fa3a71,27ECF3416910,The state senator should keep the electoral college and not change it to the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9d26dd4237f5,27ECF3416910,"Therefore, I agree with what the passage is saying because it says ''The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electors votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitles allotment of electors equals the nu,ber of memebers in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators.... ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+584b3c830852,27ECF3416910,"That to me explains it all because the college votes can vote for multiple things then the people who vote for the popular votes. So, to me they gave a good enough reasonings. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+53217528d047,27ECF3416910,"Also, Electoral College votes have a better outcome then the popular votes ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac3b93e8ca97,27ECF3416910,"because in the last election that they have for Obama he received 61.7 precent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 precent of the popular vote cast him anf Romeny. So, electoral college voted have more oppurtunies of more things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20e4b57296e7,27ECF3416910,"Although, popular votes can come in many ways of being helpful because popular votes can help people win by very littler or more. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6fb3d04074f3,27ECF3416910,"On my opino i don't consiter them to change to poplaur voted becasue to me its nothing i agree to keeping the electoral college votes 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d80b4b90b966,27ECF3416910,"
+Finally, but not last what ever you do keep the electoral college votes they know what there doing.                                                                                                                                                 ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+69729840c39b,2834DAFAB489,"The question at hand is, ""Does the electoral college work?"" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8a8a6820de0e,2834DAFAB489,"My answer to that is simple ""yes ",Position,Adequate,,,
+912d201a1d99,2834DAFAB489,",but the reasons why I say this gets a little more complicated. As you may know the founding fathers established it, the Electoral College in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens (Office of the federal register, paragraph 1). Also, A majority of 270 out of 538 electoral voters is required to elect the president. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equal the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representitives plus two for your Senators (Office of Federal Register, Paragraph 3). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b60901aa19c,2834DAFAB489,Which only goes to show that everyone gets to vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+818180852bfb,2834DAFAB489,Some may argue the Electoral, college is an anachronism ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,
+a2ead05dc6cd,2834DAFAB489,"an old and out of date method, or a non-democratic way of selecting a presedint that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. and according to Richard A. Posner they maybe right in the arguing view that the Electoral Colleger method is not democratic in a modern sense. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee, and that trust is rarely betrayed however, it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. (Richard A. Posner, 16) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf0f4a43e166,2834DAFAB489,All the college is trying to do is set a number of people who can be elected not elect the president on their own. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+3c84beb07422,2834DAFAB489,"Under the electoral college system voters vote not for the pesident but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. No one is saying leave it up to the ""state"", the distict of columbia to decide alone who our president should be but just to ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75228bc54c41,2834DAFAB489,"let them help in narrowing it down to those who fits the qualifications we need in a good president, The person who is going to run our country ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f82aff5a63f0,2834DAFAB489,"Bradford Plumer said it himself voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate so why put the humans that always make mistakes in charge of choosing who out of ""billy joe bob from the swamp"" and "" steve boy from the country club"" to run our country. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0291df18053,2834DAFAB489,I say let the qualified pick the qualified. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+97b6bb0ddd3b,283F30E12B90,i strongly believe that we should have Electoral vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+979c8eef6123,283F30E12B90,With the Electoral collage it allows for us to make there a set number on the amount of votes we can get. That being said the Electoral collaeg wpuld make it alot easier so the states adn national governmant to get the right amount of votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ef9ebd5dfa6,283F30E12B90,"With the Electoral College, it all depnds on if you state agrees to have a certain person as president. As informed in ""What is the Electoral College?"" it states that "" The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. This makes it a majority vote i order for you state to win for which ever candianate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a9ad66a66ea0,283F30E12B90,"During the 2012 election with Barack Obama and Mitt Romney, Romney had to win Ohio and Florida's Electoral vote. But becasue Obama won Florida he remained in office as our president. With this Electoral vote its a amke or break. Its not always the best thing but its the right thing. With the Electoral College you vote for a slate of voters who then vote for president. As Richard A. Posner informed us, "" Its entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. Yet that has happened very rarely. It happened in 2000, when Gore had more popular vote than Bush yet fewer electoral votes."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a2f408c0a29,283F30E12B90,the Electoral Vote is more important. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+017ca2ee04fb,283F30E12B90,"The Swing States are what determines the election. These states are different for every election becasue they will always find which one is better. The Big States is the states witha lot of electoral votes , including California who has 55 electoral votes. The higher the population the more Electoral votes you have. When a Run off election happens the Electoral College doesnt allow for Majority of teh votes cast. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5821c5568e5e,283F30E12B90,Overall you should not take the Elctoral College away. Without The Electoral College there would not be a fair shot for the canidate to win. You should keep the Electoral vote!!! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+28f320f56907,2865585E0E34,I am writing a letter to my state senator in which i'm arguing if i'm in favor of keeping the Electoral College or Changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United states ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5bfc9e4e8414,2865585E0E34,I'm in favor of the election by popular vote for the president of the U.S. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c12485d60a06,2865585E0E34,"The electoral college is unfair to voters. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c92b6038c9b3,2865585E0E34,"For instance if you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for John kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to kerry, they would go to Congress and kerry would get 34 electoral votes ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83e9a0adf712,2865585E0E34,"Also its Unfair to the voters because of the winner-takes-all system. In each state candidates dont spend time in states they know have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing""  states ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d777be18d0b4,2865585E0E34,"In the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf806f24288c,2865585E0E34,"In defense ""The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates, to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+38a5d3eae0cc,2865585E0E34,"but the winner-take-all system is still focusing on the ststes knowing that there going to vote for you, and notthe other states that possibly will or will not vote for you. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d6ab1b670de2,2865585E0E34,Another reason is that the Electoral college is just a disaster factor simple as that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37e3fa12d245,2865585E0E34,In the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not actually gone to Kennedy ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a832bce467c2,2865585E0E34,Also what if a state sends two slates of electors to congress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63bff07a17e5,2865585E0E34,"It happened in Hawii in 1960. Luckily, Vice President Richard Nixon, who presided over the senate validated only his opponents electors making sure to do so ' without establishing a precedent. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe38a2faaaca,2865585E0E34,"In conclusion the Electoral college is unfair, irrational, and just a hotmess. Like Bob Dole said ""Abolish the Electoral College ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e89dcad55764,287CDB5117E0,There are pros and cons for both whywe should keep and get rid of the Electoral college ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ab603d01cd88,287CDB5117E0,"You are voting for the electors, not the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+676fa23fa95d,287CDB5117E0,"Voters don't get to choose the electors. Some electors might even defy the wishes of the people who voted for them. There are 538 electoral votes, which is an even number so their could be a tie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5158ca308850,287CDB5117E0,"It is rare that eletors will defy the wishes of the voters, but it has happened ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8e1b51707e3,287CDB5117E0,"In 2000 Gore had a high percentage of the popular vote than electoral votes. This is so rare that the only other time that it happened was in 1888. Most states give electoral votes on a winner-takes-all basis, some split the votes a little bit, because of this there is a clear winner. In the case of electoral votes, no one region of the United States can win alone, so the votes are spread out. If presidential elections were decided directly by the popular vote than region favorites would be elected abd the rest of the voters would feel that they did'nt vote for the president that was elected. Presidential candidates are most likely to campaign in ""swing states"" that they know they cn win the electoral votes from. Voters in these states are most likely to pay close attention to both candidates, so the most thoughtful voters will get the most representation. The most populated states or the ""big states"" get the most electoral votes, meaning the states with the most people the the most representation. With the Electoral College you increase your chances of having a majority (fifty percent or more). While there can be a tie, this is rare. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c19010d484a,287CDB5117E0,"Since there are good arguements on both sides, a decision has to be made after careful thought.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c4626e7e0fb4,28A7B5B9219E,The school policy that you have decided upon is necessary that students must have a grade B average to play sports is not a good idea in my mind. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ce053eb962c,28A7B5B9219E,"Many students are at a grade C average and are playing meaning that they are already trying their best to be in the sports. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+d916b3d4e9b3,28A7B5B9219E,"When a student is pushed a little to do better they react accordingly but, when they are pushed to across their limit they tend to feel overwhelmed and agitated ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0853319d4858,28A7B5B9219E,"This overwhelming feeling can lead to procrastination and laziness, which will lower their grades which would then lead to a domino effect until they are failing. This could happen or the student would feel that they do not need to go to school anymore because they have nothing to look forward to there. Then the student may influence others and create a ring of truancy which is worse than low grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c9887a741cb,28A7B5B9219E,"The students who enjoy these extracurricular activities usually are concentrating on doing their best in sports or their extracurricular activities, if we could move their priorities without side effects we could be able to reach higher levels of learning although a grade B average sounds like the best thing to do for this, it is not. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f0ccc916b3a5,28A7B5B9219E,"Sometimes when students have a large load of homework or tests they feel the need to relax and forget about their stress, but if they need to get even higher grades the outcome would be either of these three extremes, extremely low grades, truancy, high grades (but not enough time for sports) without a lot of time students agitation would reach to a point where they might resort to drastic efforts to relieve stress, like suicide. This would then mold the school into an unfriendly jail cell, and other students will be effected. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b067fc7b15a6,28A7B5B9219E,"Instead of a grade B average as the policy, you should have a tutor at the extracurricular activities who can put in a little bit of teaching while the students are having fun. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ee9d90c123bb,28A7B5B9219E,The connection of fun and learning can lead grade C average students to achieve higher grades and do better in school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a773b364f74b,28A7B5B9219E,"Also if you can design rewards for students with higher grades the students with low grades will want to reap from the tree of knowledge to receive rewards, this in turn will yield higher grades, less procrastination, less anger, and all without any harmful side effects. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1de359c935e2,28C1E6A5576E,I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+84e73ec85397,28C1E6A5576E,not everyone get's to vote for an electon. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ef9f723b5d5,28C1E6A5576E,"If keeping the Electoral College the same, the there will never be a way where when everyone will get the chance to vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+089bc3cce607,28C1E6A5576E,The Electoral College is very unfair for not letting everyone vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44cb90888b3d,28C1E6A5576E,Those people that work that process just go to places that they know they will get a vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb459cd29e76,28C1E6A5576E,"Also, the Electoral College should change the election by poplular vote for the president of the United States because, when choosing your's elctors when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a2749eeedc86,28C1E6A5576E,"The people do not vote for president, the electors are who vote for president. When people think they are voting for president candidate, they are actually voting for slate of electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afaad81719f3,28C1E6A5576E,There's five reason to where the Electoral College should be retraining. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+48a7e47419a3,28C1E6A5576E,"Thse five main reasons are because 1) Certainy of Outcome, dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible. 2)Everyone's President, requires a presidential to have trans-regional appeal. 3)Swing States, the winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. 4)Big States, restores the weight in political balance that loose by virtue. 5)Avoid Run-Off Elections, avoides the problem of election in which they have no candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b033958f0bb3,28C1E6A5576E,"They just go to states where they will get votes, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf8e989ede14,28C1E6A5576E,they know that other states will have no affect to them when getting no vote. Im guessing that they get their hopes up? They dont give other people a chance to vote. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b72907e52b56,28D8A6A8A99D,"The Electoral College is a process where voters select electors who then vote for the President of the United State. But is it really that reliable? Is it better than an election decided by that of popular vote. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+600b27bdbc2a,28D8A6A8A99D,The election process should be changed to one decided by popular vote instead of using the process of the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+42335cb9ca54,28D8A6A8A99D,First of all source two states that voters can sometimes get confused on the candidate that they actually voted for since they're not direclty voting for the President. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0eefcc6e06e5,28D8A6A8A99D,"Another flaw of the Electoral College also stated in source two is that ""... ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please...."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+75e8ac506885,28D8A6A8A99D,That is pure lying. That basically just made that voter vote for the candidate that they did not want. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bab22cc3d6f1,28D8A6A8A99D,Another critical error is that in the process of the Electoral College is that not all states are equally represented. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+267e18642581,28D8A6A8A99D,"For example if there is a tie in the Electoral vote the election would be handed to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the presedent. This wouldnt be fair because since each state casts only one vote, then the single representativ from Wyoming would only represent 500,000 voters. However the single representative from California would represent 35 million voters. That hardly seems fair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+adbde5f23f5e,28D8A6A8A99D,With Popular vote every American would get their say in a democratic way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71559d0c5905,28D8A6A8A99D,"As source three states ""... the Electoral College is not democratic in a modern sense. With popular vote everyone would be represented equally. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a14053ae8679,28D8A6A8A99D,"I understand that ""the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote"" causes less chance of a dispute over the Electoral college than of the popular vote ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+543b0bb2cc21,28D8A6A8A99D,but not everyone really gets a say ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+34a02f377efa,28D8A6A8A99D,Also i understand that the Electoral College avoids run off elections ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+929bae874555,28D8A6A8A99D,but that is still very rare. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b0dcd0341491,28D8A6A8A99D,"State Senator it's time to abolish the Electoral college, and switch to the use of popular vote for elections.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3dac58c01080,28DB1BCCB6AF,I agree on the position of having a system of communication for school work. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+74f6d505bba7,28DB1BCCB6AF,"Now lets say If you can not go to school if you have let's say the corona virus, you can just have classes there in bed,on a couch,or the kitchen table just like you would be at school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f60531321db,28DB1BCCB6AF,"There are certain devices nowadays like a robot on wheels with a screen attached so the student could drive the robot carefully since it can go only less than 3 mph but can give the child the joy of video games from home and education they need. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76dfb0ef52f2,28DB1BCCB6AF,"Another way of how the students could ""go to school"" from home is a IPad face time the person who is at home IPhone could ping a call to every class based on the classes schedules. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+39579533e637,28DB1BCCB6AF,"I see these sort of devices extremely helpful to the community, Plus a huge benefit to the students since If they get the work done at home they could join the rest of the class with very little to no catch up time.
+
+I once on a personal note, once had to stay home from school since I had the stomach bug the whole family In my home had, I had to get caught up so I used the Google classroom and electude websites that the teachers say to use at home, just in case you miss class due to viruses. Once I returned the next week I was caught up in my B day rotation classes and A days I was ahead of everyone else in Generic_School so I could work In the shop more than the others ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5fec041c695,28DB1BCCB6AF,"So note, If you are ever at home You may see if the school can provide the face time idea or just work in Google classroom or what ever website your class uses at home or If school or hospitals provides A robot for absentees for a day then all the better for the student and the parents. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9fc76bedeb24,28FF2BE0AB1A,I think driverless cars would be a very cool thing to have ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1a5818430558,28FF2BE0AB1A,"Also its outside the box not every car can be driverless but some can. Just look a lamborghini or ferrari they dont have as much technology as some of the newer middle class cars do.
+
+But your paying $500,000 for some thing that doesnt have as many features as a prius or a smart car. But also driverless cars arent really driveless if some has to take the wheel and go around some things that means the cars not really driveless ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6cd9fb984a7,28FF2BE0AB1A,I would rather drive my car than let a computer beacuse technology will always have problems and errors ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+745811e552d2,28FF2BE0AB1A,if that happens gonig down a highway at say 70mph and your car has a problem and you aren't ready for it you may end up in the hospital. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e23d3858561,28FF2BE0AB1A,Driverless cars will happen one day but not anytime soon cause some states say they arent even legal to drive a computer operated car. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+892c95a1f7a8,2909EE180A2A,I think it fair that kids who have a B average should choose a sport but kids how have F. Should not be able to choose a sport ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ec4fa789e17,2909EE180A2A,they worried more about there sport. Then about school or school work then they don't have time to do there homework. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+140996d2d215,2909EE180A2A,"Then they might even fail the grade there in. But people who have a B should be able to choose a sport because there doing well in school. And not failing in school there tried hard so they should be able to choose a sport that they like. But if they start doing bad in school or not doing there homework and start to get an F they should talk to the student. And tell him/her if they have a sport and still have
+
+B average or in the next test they take and get an F. there going to have take away there sport till she /he has better grades. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+623829ec32e3,2912B4A5D526,I'm writing you this letter to address and give you my opinion onthe argument about keeping the clectoral college or changing to election by popular vote fhor the president of the United States. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+45e9473601dd,2912B4A5D526,I feel that we should remove the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cf4d4dbff027,2912B4A5D526,because it seems like we do not use all of the votes to have everyone's input on the election. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d92121df96a7,2912B4A5D526,"The electoral college consist of 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. My question is ""Why not use all of the electors votes instead of using only anout 55% of them?"". We say that every vote counts but if we are not using all of the electoral votes then that means we are just contradicting our statement. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6cd1b6903a0,2912B4A5D526,"From articles I have read, Under the electoral college, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the resident. Let's say if you lived in Texas, for instance , and wanted to vote for Kerry, you would vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+491ac61b0045,2912B4A5D526,Voters can not always control whom their vote for and sometimes voters get confused about the electors and choose the wrong canidate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84e7234a3574,2912B4A5D526,Some people may say that electoral votes should be kept so that it would make it easier for them ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cfe1d05f5c26,2912B4A5D526,"but i feel thatelectoral votes are confusing and should be removed from a process of electing the president. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0c37d32d82d3,294099CEB05C,"
+I agree with the terms that to participate in sports and other activities, that you must have at least a grade B average. Although many students have a grade C average, I think it's best to follow through with this policy. It would help students in school, as well as make the teams and activities a more stricter, nicer team. ",Position,Effective,,,
+881498e39486,294099CEB05C,Students should have to have at least a grade B average to be on the school's sports teams or in any other activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0fb2bb7f0cc4,294099CEB05C,"By doing this, the students at our school will be smarter and more mature. The student will have to wok very hard to achieve a grade B average and will have to study more. Tests scores will go up and because the students want such good grades that they will have to pay attention during class; therefore, the students won't act out in class, as well as the activities they are in. They will care about the team or club and do their best. I think the policy for having a grade B average to be on activities at the school should be a yes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3dc4b4c2af8b,294099CEB05C,"Students with a grade B average will be rounded quite well, for they will have the smarts, as well as the athletics. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d5a33d110393,294099CEB05C,"Everyone can make a grade B average, so this policy would not be unfair. It would challenge the students to do there best on every paper they turn in. The students would also learn new study skills, as well as fundamental organization skills that are needed in everyday life. If students could keep up with all their school stuff, study good, and keep good grades, then collage will be easier when it comes their time. It's proven that students that make the better grades do better in college and other activities, then the ones that make less decent grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d5dba8c1c237,294099CEB05C,"To have the kids that are in clubs or on sports teams that have a grade B average or better, they will have more smarts to carry out plays better. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2eb050b9cdd7,294099CEB05C,"If the quarter back on the football team doesn't have the right fundamentals down, then the quarterback is useless. Smarts also help in groups. For a student to have a grade B average, then they must have some type of leadership in them. So for a grade B average student to be in a club or something of that nature, then the group will have a better bonding. They will be able to work together and develop into a team or group. Brainstorming ideas for ways to help the community will be able to be organized and arranged neatly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f98821d7090,294099CEB05C,"Having the students maintain an grade B average at our school is a policy that should be passed.
+
+Helping the students think for themselves, giving them necessary elements in life, and keeping them well rounded; this is what the policy offers. I think that the policy should be passed. It helps kids grow to be better adults, as well as help them in other situations in life. By doing the policy, it enhancing our generation, as well as many to come. Instead of more and more kids just barely making the grades, they will work towards being the best student they could be. The teachers are happy, the students feel proud of their grades, and all the activities are filled with smart wonderful children, this is why the policy you are suggesting should be passed and should be started in our school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a851a094edfc,29450AD2A452,I think that kids should be aloud to help kid pick up litter and other things like that to help our community. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2908491774ce,29450AD2A452,If the kids at the school do this it shows other people that really don't care that there are some people out there that want a better community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fcd26c172c2,29450AD2A452,"if we start it can really catch on and the more and more we do it the more it catches on to people. just like all of the drinkers out there that through there bottles or can on the ground or the other ones that cant make it to a garbage can or just didn't want to, care ,or feel like putting it in a garbage can. those are the people that we are trying to get through about this situation ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cbc89fdd93d0,29450AD2A452,"all kids young and old should be aloud to help the elementary kids with there school work or get some friends and pick up the litter, because there not hurting anyone there helping us and our community. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b415bd46ace9,294CA62F98EC,I believe that the way of voting for a president though the Electoral College is outdated. The popular vote should be deciding who becomes president. ,Position,Effective,,,
+1332418b4dab,294CA62F98EC,Some Runner-ups have had the backing of the popular vote and not won because of the Electoral College ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4afc3a1644ad,294CA62F98EC,Several things you should consider is people can actually vote though popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e907a3d700fc,294CA62F98EC,he minority will have a better chance ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb89698cd45f,294CA62F98EC,"presidents have lost to the Electoral College. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+75640970bc80,294CA62F98EC,"when people go to vote for the next preident or the returning one they arent actually voting for the president they are voting for electoral votes but some state wont even allow people to vote for that. Some states the electors vote for who they want and the peoples votes they are accounting for become nothing. They go out and vote for nothing. "" Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana Legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors wiht new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.""(source 2) This is what cna happen when poeple can vote who they want and u have electors doing it for them they will put someone in the race that no one wants to really be there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+437adb29778f,294CA62F98EC,But some poeple say that the Electoral College is there to help us and to help most states have the winner take all system. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dbd83205e940,294CA62F98EC,The electoral college is unfair to voters ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6076aabc55f5,294CA62F98EC,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states.""(source 2) which means that they won't visit every state because there is no reason to visit some. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8bbc4710fb92,294CA62F98EC,"Next, The minority will have a chance ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7dcf9079b8c3,294CA62F98EC,"If there ever is a deadlock in the campiagn the voting will have to go to the house which will be mostly filled with the majority side. So the minority won' have much of a chance."" Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state."" (source 3) that means a close election isn't so close anymore because of Electoral vote. But some people will say u can never get a tie. "" A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538- is an even number.""(source 3) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8361a5da1032,294CA62F98EC,"According to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- tanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost preisidency.""(source 2) Which means Al Gore would have been president and not the other guy. Which would have changed today in one way or another. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dddbffd0f96c,294CA62F98EC,"Some people do say The electoral vote is for the better. "" The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+da06ca85f479,294CA62F98EC,But why do they get to vote for them and we dont. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7.31910087E+107,294CA62F98EC,"In Conclusion, The Electoral College should be eradicated and the popular vote should take its place. The popular vote is better because people can actually vote, the minority will have a chance, Presidents loss becasue of Electoral Vote but win the Popular vote. In the end the Electoral College is outdated, unfair, and irrational. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+97d285b7e0ff,29534C6BD280,I think the election system should change to most popular state votes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5cacaf0a96ab,29534C6BD280,because it's only counting Americans who represent the Democratic and the Republican. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0a86b1ec6b42,29534C6BD280,"The Electoral College does get its votes and completes the system but you have to vote for a slate of electors, not just that but voters can't always control their vote and voters would get confused about the electors and probably would vote for the incorrect candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a37fbd58ab0,29534C6BD280,The Electoral College is unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aff6e2b1927e,29534C6BD280,"In 1960, the Louisiana legislature nearly replaced the Democratic electors with new electors so John F. Kennedy wouldn't get the most popular vote, while that was going on electors were being defiant about voting for their party's candidate and voted for whoever they wanted to choose. also in 1960, a state sent two slates of electors to congress in Hawaii, but Vice President Richard Nixon validated his opponent's eclectors without establishing a precedent. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0710e714c3bd,29534C6BD280,"If the state uses a different system such as counting votes from different states, we wouldn't have as much problems we have with it now because the votes in the electoral college are outdated and irrational, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+73897fb1df82,29534C6BD280,"even Bob Dole said ""Abolish the electoral college!"". Americans who vote in the electoral college would not be confused and fussy anymore about who their voting in a different type of system because the electoral college system would sometimes be unorganized and not allow equal votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f20157b8008,29534C6BD280,An anachronism is a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled and receives the most popular votes wins the president election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c4e454cd59b,29534C6BD280,"the Electoral College method is not democratic because the electors elect the president only, Americans are only voting for the slate of electors and voting for the presidentail candidate. The winner of the electoral vote doesn't win the most popular votes, but in 2000, Al Gore had more popular votes than George Bush but less electoral votes than Bush ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+428b078cb434,29534C6BD280,"So the reason why we should retain the electoral college sytem because it's not fair because they avoid the run off elections which happened in 1968 and 1992 to Nixon and Clinton but the electoral college reduced the electoral votes in the run off elections, the electoral college never thinks about the outcome and almost have the winning president lose, in 2012 Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote and had the same percentage of popular votes than Romney, and the electoral college turn off potential voters for a candidate knowing their votes will have no effect because they don't pay attention to the campaign. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+67f8cfc64cdb,296D2E892341,"Some people say it was created by aliens, some people think it is just a rock. That thing is The Face on Mars. In 1976 a spaceshuttle named the Viking one was taking pictures of the Red planet also known as Mars. To find a possable landing place for its sister Viking two. Vikking one was scanning one day and found something on the surface of Mars that resembled a face of a human. The people who were getting the pictures of Mars that were back on Earth were shocked to see a human face appear on another planet. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ee8393fc005b,296D2E892341,"In the passage it says "" It looks like something that aliens made"". Like I said some people think its from aliens ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+728cdbdaa968,296D2E892341,"but, thats not logical. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ec003b7d480a,296D2E892341,"If aliens were real than I would believe it. Than again in the passage it also says that The ""face"" could be a mesa. Whenever they took a picture of it ten times sharper than the one before people still wouldn't believe that it is a rock and not an alien creation. When they say alien creation they think of an alien standing there and cutting into rock to make it look like a human face with a really big head. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4099e671653e,296D2E892341,In the passage it says that it is just a mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+182ecfe25bb6,296D2E892341,Some scientist think the way the shaddows are it makes the mesa look like a Egyptian Pharaoh. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57746ffd266b,296D2E892341,"The passage says that they don't see it often and that they use cameras that go small strip by small strip all over the planet and take pictures. Since the Face on Mars has been discovered it has been popular it starred in movies, books, magazines, and people talk about it in talk shows on the radio, also people talk about in the line at he grocery story. It was discovered just about fourty years ago. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4424dc3e994f,296D2E892341,In my opinion I think it is some rocks that got covered up by dust overtime ,Position,Adequate,,,
+25b33f40870b,296D2E892341,If people think that it was created by aliens than that's their opinion. It has been scientifically proven that it was not created by aliens. If it was made by aliens then why would the aliens want us humans to know that there is life on that planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c24d18a0716,296D2E892341,But some pictures of the Face on Mars actually looks like a face ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3718d684ec99,296D2E892341,"but, that could just be the way the planet is getting light and reflected by the sun. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3bd629ca3f60,296D2E892341,"So in my opinion I think it is a rock and all the people who think other wise they don't have proof to show that it is a alien creation. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dab2be467288,296D2E892341,"So in conclusion this face on mars isn't a alien creation it is just rocks. In the passage it says that its a lava dome that takes place of an isolated mesa about the same size of the Face on mars which is two miles. So to all the people that think that it is an alien creation, its not. To be honest I think its just dust build up in some places, so when theres a shadow it shines off of it and makes a face that everyone freeks out about. Its just a big rock that does nothing I don't see why it would be a big deal in the first place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+84397a0174de,297F3F4B6B58,The Electoral College shows many reasons why we should change it to popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1349a5f05c64,297F3F4B6B58,Like for instance The Electoral college is not fair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a34ad291aa5,297F3F4B6B58,but by voting with popular vote not only will more people vote but more people will vote for who they want to vote and not get confused and vote for the wrong candidate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5b9a54c2fcc,297F3F4B6B58,"how Bradford Plumer stated during the 2000 campaign a variety of states that didnt vote because of not being able to see a campaign ad and they did that because some candidates dont focus on the states that they know theyre not gonna win. But by voting with popular vote you get to vote for who you want, everone gets to vote because every state would be equal and people would vote for the president and not for the slate of electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4779ec2fcf39,297F3F4B6B58,"yes, maybe the Electoral College could be good for something for like winning ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c6fc24730725,297F3F4B6B58,"Also if you think about it, it could be worse like even worse than the 2000 fiasco election ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+954a993fb8f4,297F3F4B6B58,and plus the Electoral College avoids run-off elections so thats a good thing if you want a clear winner ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a4c26fb65ac,297F3F4B6B58,"Other than that popular vote is much more sufficient than Electoral vote because its much more fair and with popular vote everyone votes on who they want to vote and every state gets the same, equal treatment as the others. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3bf06a46fa27,299591FA8205,Community service has been part of many peoples lives in this world. Many people do community service to help others and better this world. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+821d8d99217f,299591FA8205,Well i think doing community service should be a grown ups job to do not a student or any kid in the world. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6ecbd9e326a1,299591FA8205,Students shouldn't be wasting their time i something they don't want do. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b0b14f30736e,299591FA8205,"They have a lot in head for ex. school , homework , siblings they have to take car of , after school programs , and sports they have to go to go to ! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+051a0482e9a7,299591FA8205,"I understand doing community service is a good thing to do in this world , but kids shouldn't do it at all ! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96f91bb654d7,299591FA8205,Some students should be require but not all ! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5886e540ce8c,299591FA8205,If a student is failing a class or classes and needs points to pass their class require them to do community service. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc204e2fc8cf,299591FA8205,"All students shouldn't to be require to do community service , only the people that need it. Its just a waste of time in a kids life , even though they know that they are doing something good in this world by helping others. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ad0889e35ec9,299C0AA4D716,"The electoral college has many inherint flaws that make it less desirable than a simple election by popular vote. It's only rebuttals to said flaws are weak, and provide little to no reason why the college is beneficial. So there is no real reason to have it in the first place. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+dc8e098e1b4d,299C0AA4D716,"Popular vote stands to not only correct the errors of the electoral college, but also to refine our voting system ",Position,Effective,,,
+a4b7193412c2,299C0AA4D716,"It would accomplish this by closer to a real democracy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8c3e50d07bc,299C0AA4D716,and forcing the candidates to win over more people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+27d3d813b40d,299C0AA4D716,A democracy has long been revered as one of the best forms of government. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab6b895fb421,299C0AA4D716,"It is more liberating than a dictatorship or monarchy in which people are governed by a higher class, which is more often than not decided by someone other than themselves. In a democracy however, people are given the ability to put who they desire in office. They have the ability to be governed by the person of their choice. This, however, is impeded upon by the electoral college. Because what it does is simply insert a middle man into an otherwise democratic society. We are forced to rely on people we elect to vote for us. Which is irrational as it is completely unecessary. The extra step only sets us up for deception and betrayal. I mean why would you trust a man on the street to cast a vote for you when doing so yourself is much more reliable? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+91672a854741,299C0AA4D716,Though why does it even matter if the candidate you want to vote for won't even come to your state? There's obviously no reason to vote democrat if your say will simply be overshadowed by the wave of republicans in your area. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+93023613de0b,299C0AA4D716,"With popular vote though, candidates should be more inclined to visit as many states as possible and get their message out there. Because a 51% vote in a state no longer means a 100% victory. With the new influx of political campaigns, perhaps more people are swayed from their usual path of voting. While yes, there are neutral states that need a push either way, you're not going to increase your votes ten-fold by pushing past that 50% barrier. You actually have to earn every vote you get. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eb3dd3032ca1,299C0AA4D716,"There is no real reason to keep the electoral college. It serves as a pointless middle man to an otherwise great government. Popular vote requires more out of the candidates, and puts more say into the individual vote.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cb6880ab9437,29BE895CD900,There is a deabate wether Electoral College should or shouldn't be alowed. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+215b66630677,29BE895CD900,"I thing we should keep it because this everyones right to vote. alos it is in the constition. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+bbe3bf3c5d20,29BE895CD900,"
+Electoral Colleges should be abole to vote because it can sway votes ""Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+926ce2988601,29BE895CD900,"This quote shows that it can sway the voters because they voted for them and theay vote for that person to be the next president. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce006621fbff,29BE895CD900,The bad thing about Electoral Colleges is if there a run-off election ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a7c504a31048,29BE895CD900,"""The presidentail election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner...."" I took it as the Electoral Colleges is the ones to chose the out come of it so why do we vote then if they chose at the end of all of it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+10e9f910b6ec,29BE895CD900,the last reason Electoral College should be abole to vote is that they dont have all the controle ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+786bffc332fa,29BE895CD900,"""A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible-it haqppened in 2000- but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote"". This shows that the people can also way the vote the way they want it to go if there is a larg amount of you that agree. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+130c7bd30643,29BE895CD900,These are the reasons I thing Electoral College people should be abole to vote. everyone should be abole to vote because it is everyones freedom to vote for what they want.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5cbb7b03f27a,2A2F04CC199E,I think you should make community service mandatory for a few reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+233a70939f48,2A2F04CC199E,"First, community service should forced because it make our area a better place to live overall. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db77157933bf,2A2F04CC199E,Picking up litter makes it a cleaner and more enjoyable place to be. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbcddcb90146,2A2F04CC199E,Next community service shouldn't be optional because it builds character. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+35864157f5c2,2A2F04CC199E,It develops compassion and kindness in people. It helps them realize that the place they live in is important to them and to other people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ec43a2beec1,2A2F04CC199E,"Lastly, community service is important because it gets people off their couch and in to the streets helping people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5ac4bd8987df,2A2F04CC199E,"It helps to make kids realize how tough the real world is and how hard it will be when they grow up. And, of course, colleges love kids who do good things for their community, like community service! 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dfd2865ef227,2A2F04CC199E,I can see why people say that community service isn't necessary. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+69d5fce6d42c,2A2F04CC199E,But I think that they say it because they are just lazy. We need to get them out and about teaching children or picking up litter ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a600157588b9,2A2F04CC199E,"
+As you can see, community service is crucial and should be mandatory for all kids in our school. Without community service, the state of our city will deteriorate until it is no more. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+175b3f7ad770,2A35A23BE3C3,"As a student of this school, I believe it is very necessary to require community service at our school, ",Position,Effective,,,
+01de0728e9b1,2A35A23BE3C3,"although many students will not appreciate this, in the long run they will learn to appreciate what they are given and begin to act less selfish and more selfless. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9c307de24dee,2A35A23BE3C3,"Community service will also give them a sense of accomplishment and more responsibility, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+513f1d58ff6f,2A35A23BE3C3,this will indeed create a busy lifestyle therefore not giving time to do unnecessary or harmful things to themselves of the student body. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e9f710ae0aef,2A35A23BE3C3,This act of community service will allow all students to learn and experience new things and better themselves for their future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+67082c2c6595,2A35A23BE3C3,I also believe the school administration should create a presentation showing students that this can be indeed a very fun task! ,Claim,Effective,,,
+74ba7f7024c1,2A35A23BE3C3,"For example, if a students enjoys pets' he/she can volunteer at their local pet adoption area. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+583e4163c07a,2A35A23BE3C3,"Maybe their is a student who would love to become involved with children or seniors, they may sign-up to help out at a local church, daycare center, pre-k, or nursing home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+73d2fcdc9769,2A35A23BE3C3,There are even ways for kids who would like to be a part of the entertaining world to get involved! ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b9b9523aeec,2A35A23BE3C3,"Students can get involved in their community in countless ways weather its piking up trash or reading books to a small child, there are only 3 steps to community service... ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3477e2ca356e,2A35A23BE3C3,1)Find out what you would like to do 2) Sign-up for it and 3) Do it and have a blast! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+035f24833e44,2A35A23BE3C3,"So as you see principle TEACHER_NAME, this will eventually teach all students that helping out is not only productive but fun and will help you towards the future! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e5422660158d,2A52459E72AD,"""Ugh, I wish that I could just stay home and attend my classes online without having to leave home,"" I say to myself at least eight million times during the school day; taking a moment to think about it, I thought maybe this would be beneficial. Today we live in a society in which students attend classes on a daily basis, some who walk across the street to attend class, some who have at least an hour commute to attend class everyday, and some who take online courses, which is very beneficial ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b994f055248b,2A52459E72AD,"Although some may believe otherwise, students benefit substantially when they attend classes from their homes ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fafed78bbf1d,2A52459E72AD,it is an easier and more convenient option ,Claim,Effective,,,
+94ece90f5078,2A52459E72AD,some students may be unable to attend class due to an illness or disability. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f5a1c126f198,2A52459E72AD,"First and foremost, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because this option is easier and much more convenient for students ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2f4796333db8,2A52459E72AD,"For instance, my mom was very busy at home caring for my sisters and at the time, there was no way she would have been able to attend any sort of class, therefore, she found an online option for the University of Phoenix where she could earn a degree by completing an online course. Due to the fact that this option was an availability for her, she was able to earn her degree with the slightest of ease ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8e174633e203,2A52459E72AD,"Additionally, this convenience allowed her to still be able to care for my sisters and complete her online courses without the stress of attending the class in person. Undoubtedly, had she not had this easy and convenient option open to her, she would have never had the time to earn her degree ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+74c8f8197792,2A52459E72AD,"Another example of why attending online classes is easy and more convenient is when I was already late for class and then I got stuck in traffic on the way to my Spanish 3 class, resulting in me missing the entirety of the class. Had I been registered for the same class but online, I would have never missed the Spanish 3 final exam. For these reasons, online classes can be much easier, convenient, and beneficial when dealing with life's daily obstacles. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8a3aff94c8c0,2A52459E72AD,"In most cases, online and video conferencing classes from home are beneficial to students because it enables a student who may be ill or disabled a chance to attend a class from their home, which may be a challenge for them if they were to attend it in person ",Claim,Effective,,,
+657c788412b1,2A52459E72AD,"For example, I have Lyme disease, which makes it difficult sometimes to attend class because I am always fatigue. With this in mind, I plan on taking a few online classes myself, and I am so glad that this option is offered for the school I want to attend, which is Virginia Tech. I will no longer have to worry about if I will have enough energy to get out of bed and make it to class or if my joint pain is just too much to bare because I have the benefit of being able to be within the comfort of my home and still attend class online. Certainly, had I not had this amazing, beneficial opportunity to attend class online, I would have not been able to attend class regularly, without it being somewhat challenging ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8f33a574ac93,2A52459E72AD,"Another example of why online and video conferencing classes are beneficial to a student with an illness or disability is illustrated the time my Generic_Name was in college and got an bad spinal and neck injury, allowing her to not be able to walk for months and having to be in a wheel chair. It was very difficult for her to attend her English, Psychology, and AB Calculus classes due to this disability. Her counselor recommended that she stayed home for a few months to recover and continue attending her very important classes via video conference while her professor was teaching. Ultimately, had she not reaped the benefits from attending her classes through video at home, it would have been an enormous task to make it to her classes on a daily basis. In conclusion, online and video conference classes are a huge advantage for students who have trouble attending their classes in person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fd866a1fdf0c,2A52459E72AD,"Some may disagree and say that online or video conferencing classes are not beneficial to students because they are not reliable enough to capture the actual environment of how a class my be like if a student were to attend it in person, resulting in an online student attendee not learning as much as a student who attends the same class in person ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+636857293741,2A52459E72AD,"This reasoning is understandable, however, it is also flawed due to the fact that online courses teach the same exact curricula that is taught in an actual class. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9d867aa794ac,2A52459E72AD,"For instance, my friend Generic_Name took the same class that I did during the school year, however, she took the course online over the summer; the class was Economics and Personal Finance. When we both were tested on the material that we learned during the course, she scored higher than I did which shocked me. In conclusion, online classes have the same material and benefits just as much as an actual classroom has and does not hinder the knowledge gained for taking the class in either way. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2539540cd293,2A52459E72AD,"Conclusively, it is important to understand that attending online or video conference classes from home are very beneficial to students because it is an extremely useful alternative to students. In the past, students never had the chance to benefit from this new, sophisticated way of learning through online or video conferencing and had to attend class in person because technology was not as advanced as it is today. In the future, technology will advance even more than it already has, making online courses even more beneficial, possibly resorting to only online teaching. Ultimately, students benefit substancially from attending classes via online or video conferencing and this option should always continue to remain an option for students that need the benefits that it has to offer. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+04bde7510aef,2A5FFA718E2C,"Dear readers, im here to tell you about the face on Mars. We were traveling up to Mars to get some cool pictures and we noticed that in one of the pictures was a misterious face! ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c493e2e13099,2A5FFA718E2C,As soon as we saw it everyone directly assummed it was created by aliens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e05f3eaf1f74,2A5FFA718E2C,"""NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted ""huge rock formation... which rembles a human head. fprmed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars."" (3)
+
+""The ""Face on Mars"" has since become a pop icon."" (5) When I first saw it i had no idea what the face was, i thought maybe it was just me that saw it or something. I would have never guessed that it would become so big to us. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a151901690a5,2A5FFA718E2C,"My friend Fred thinks that aliens did it, aliens arent real... are they? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0216126a7f73,2A5FFA718E2C,"i mean ow could such a puniy creater make such a fuse over a interesting face. Aliens are not real!!
+
+When Fred was rantting about how it had to be an alien and nothing else could have made thoose faces i was thinking that he might have gone crazy ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c9ebd0ba1d68,2A5FFA718E2C,I mean it could have been alines but most likly not. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+dcdbeb4981fd,2ABF91C208B8,I believe that keeping the Electoral College is a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e2f48edce9b,2ABF91C208B8,but I also think that changing to the popular vote is also a great idea. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+aff4b6fec199,2ABF91C208B8,"I think we should stick with the Electoral College because you vote for your president, vice president, electors, and where the electors meet all at the same time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+edfaf34d59da,2ABF91C208B8,"I don't think we should change it to the popular vote because then it wouldn't be fair on the people thats running for president or electors, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ece4c56e7f6,2ABF91C208B8,we also wouldn't be able to vote for everything all at once so it would make things very difficult. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d7b20f3f260,2ABF91C208B8,"Sticking with the Electoral College would be the best fit in my opinon. I believe its best to stick with because everybody knows how to use it, its been aroud for many years and it has always worked perfectly fine and has been fair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3d108649354,2ABF91C208B8,"Under the 23rd Amendement of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allowed to have three electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. The eletoral college consists of 538 electors. The majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. If we switched to the popular vote, it would be nothing like how the Electoral College works. The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice pressident, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f14d18726254,2ABF91C208B8,"If we are to switch to the popular vote, people would b fighting and arguing constantly, there would be no piece. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab47b687c2f5,2ABF91C208B8,"I dont believe anybody would be happy because thats not a fair way to choose how our President, Vice president and the Representatives should be picked. We pick a new president every four years so why don't we just keep it the way it been for a long time so we don't mess everybody up on their decisions. Another reaosn why I don't care to switch is because what if we run into a run-off election. If we run into one of those it would be hard to get out of it just because we wouldn't know what to do. Popular vote would also run us into "" swing votes. "" If we were to get stuck in a swing vote, everybody would have to re vote and then pray it dosen't happen again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+057c8a0927e7,2ABF91C208B8,"Now that I have explained myself in much detail on why I think the Electoral College should stay the same, and why the Popular vote should be thrown in the garbage, please take what I said into concideration. I'm sure I could be wrong on a lot of things but I hope I got my point out and accros on why other people and myself think it should stay the same. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3bf709866262,2AC01E3AB211,"Many schools require that all students must attend school, rather than doing an online school, while some schools allow students to chose to do online school. For most students, attending school shouldn't be an issue;however, that is not the case for some students ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c1f390a8a9e9,2AC01E3AB211,"Although some may think that online school or video conferencing would prevent students from acquiring important skills that one would get from daily interaction, some students would benefit from online school ",Position,Effective,,,
+972e61838c5f,2AC01E3AB211,because some kids may have more pressure to help out at home ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f49e6567c5e4,2AC01E3AB211,many students have trouble focusing when around many other students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5f1fce2cc2c2,2AC01E3AB211,"
+Starting off, there are plenty of students that are more relied on at home and taking online school would give them more time to assist at home. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6e6284426d36,2AC01E3AB211,"For example, my friend lives in her apartment with her older sister who is diagnosed with cancer but still works almost everyday to provide for her family, her cousin who is mentally disabled and cannot work, and her mom who has a medical condition where she has trouble walking. My friend sometimes has to leave school early just to go to her job and works eight hour shifts, five days a week and stays up to do her homework or sometimes isn't able to complete it. Online school or video conferencing would save drastic amounts of time in order for her to be able to work more to provide for her family and be able to pay for online school and make meals for her family, while still getting her education. Overall, online school would be a better option for some students whose family situations may need a little more attention than others ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+07da61d625bd,2AC01E3AB211,"Furthermore, some students may have a mental disorder that would prevent them from giving their full, undivided attention in the classroom. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5c5db7339211,2AC01E3AB211,"For example, one of my friends is diagnosed with Attention-Deficit-Hyperactive Disorder(ADHD). She gets distracted very easily, especially in a classroom full of students. My friend getting distracted constantly by the noises of a student tapping their pencil, someone coughing, or simply the presence of many people in a classroom has a largely negative impact on her school performance. For her, distance school would get rid of a good amount of those distractions, and help her focus more on her schoolwork. Therefore, some students who have personal complications, and taking online school would boost their educational performance. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+65e7afc6ae23,2AC01E3AB211,"In conclusion, while many think that taking online school would have students lack social skills for their future job, online school would have a positive impact for students who need to help out more at home and for students that physically attending school would prevent them from their full potential. Unfortunately, attending school is not the best option for some students, and having the choice of online school should definitely be provided to students who would greatly benefit from it.             ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f932e0154694,2AD3F67D6348,I think for the election for presidency its should be counted on the popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c1cad503e536,2AD3F67D6348,"Why I think it should be on the popular vote is because it should count on what the people vote on,not on the electoral college. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2b023fea3bd,2AD3F67D6348,"We should be the people to have the vote on the president and not just a piece of it. Plus the electoral colleges don't even vote on the president,they vote on a slate for the electors who then vote for president.
+
+voting should be on the popular vote now because the electoral colleges are not even voting on the president they're voting on the electors who vote for president. When if there was a direct vote we would then be voting just for the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66c0e887c49b,2AD3F67D6348,"Yes sometimes we would vote someone else for president by accident , ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+531036056155,2AD3F67D6348,but not as much as the electoral college does. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+312f699e6091,2AD3F67D6348,thats why I think we should have a direct vote instead of having the electoral colleges voting for us pretty much. It just sounds like it would woork better if the people voted for president and not the people voinng for elctors who then vote for the president.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c1913c4cbd04,2AE0D00CAD7D,"In this essay I will be writing an argumentative essay over ""The Face on Mars"" theory. This is a very argumentative subject that can have two sides to itt based on the factual evidence in the passage.""The Face on Mars"" was consider to have been made by alien lifeform. ""The Face on Mars"" is 2 miles long and is a major pop icon. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4e195f605462,2AE0D00CAD7D,"I think ""The Face on Mars"" is just a huge rock formation that was formed by the planet's weathering and erosion from nearby rocks. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa227deecff2,2AE0D00CAD7D,"Since this planet has a rain season and has a very windy winter, it could've been made by weathering and erosion. Another thing that makes me believe that the face is just a rock is because the dark eyes, nose, and mouth look like shadows from the camera and the sun. One last thing about the face is that if alien lifeform made this why woud they make it 2 miles wide? This has just been one side of the argument, I will write the rest. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc602069b48d,2AE0D00CAD7D,I think that this face is made by alien lifeform because it really looks a face. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+4c817b9b32bd,2AE0D00CAD7D,This face could've possibly been a temple or worshiping place for these lifeforms long ago. It could've been a tomb for their leader or king that might've died. If these aliens were going to make a rock this big and that wide it would be for someone or something to catch it's eye. So aliens could've made this or they might not have. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fded7955c084,2AE0D00CAD7D,"I think that ultimately this is just a coincidence because if aliens are real or were real we would have got aa picture of one or saw some remains of one. And the rock is probably just a mesa or a big landform that was made by weathering and erosion. The face of the rock is most likely just shadows from the camera angle and the sun. And another thing, when the camera passed over the mesa, it was a cloudy and rainy day, making the camera lens wet. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d92729a7e1b0,2AE0D00CAD7D,I think that the rock is a mesa. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+20833d69c6ee,2AE0D00CAD7D,The proof is in the article and it would have been noticed in the pictures if there was aliens living on Mars. So the non-alien side wins this argument over this one. The rock is not a face it is a normal rock.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e01080ba55d,2B1C42B1F534,Would you keep the Electoral College how it is or would you keep it? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7517875891ab,2B1C42B1F534,I would want to keep it how it is. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d863083c5f22,2B1C42B1F534,why i think that we should keep it how it is because is concissed of it concissed of 538 electors and the majority of 270 elector votes is required to elect the president. your state is required to allotment of the electors to equal the number od members in its Congerssional delgation. Under the 23 Amendment the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors. each canidate running for state has the there own group of electors. Electors are genarall choosen by the politial party. you or who ever is voteing helps choose your states electors when you vote. but when you vote for your candidate you ae actually voting for you candidates electors. After the electon there is a Certificate of Ascertainment perpared by the governor listing all of the canidates who ran for President along with the hname sod their electors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+93cc581e8b9f,2B1C42B1F534,Althoe there are some reasons why the Electoral college should change. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+116d3b7be5b7,2B1C42B1F534,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy carter, Bob Dole, and plenty of oothers think that it should change because according to a gallup poll in 2000 taken shortlyafer Al Gore he wonn the popular vote but lost the presidency dur to the quirks of the electoral college. in the Electoral College system people vote not for the prresident but for a slate of electors as i had said in the last pargrraph who in turn elect or the president. electors could be anyon not holding public office. voters sometimes control who there electors vote for. wich makes the voters sometimes get confsed about the electors wich makes them vote for the wrong candidate. In the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in the centery. in 1960 segegaters in Louisiana legslater nearly suceeddin replacing Democratic electora with new electors. So that the popular vote for Kennedy woulld not have actually gone to Kennedy. So them electors in the same vein they qould have to occasionally refuse to vote for the partys cannidate and cast a decideiing vote to who ever they please. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b731454cf9ac,2B1C42B1F534,So as research shown ther are som eflaws in the Elecoral College.         ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9a57f78ae853,2B3DBFA4579D,I believe that we should keep the Electoral college for our compromise between the election of the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ce3feb4fe940,2B3DBFA4579D,I argue this because with the Electoral College we get to vote for who we believe is gonna help us out during thier years as President not the choice of the president who we might not believe or trust in anymore to vote for us or the other side. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+369cd3296b56,2B3DBFA4579D,So I argue to keep the Electoral College to select our presidemt for the U.S. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fe833609c610,2B3DBFA4579D,The Ellectoral College lets us People who are able to vote vote for who we want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+088f53b13291,2B3DBFA4579D,"In ""Does the Electoral College Work"" Source 1: What is The Ellectoral College? written by the office of the federal register states that""by a popular vote of qualified citizens"". This displays that we the peoplewho are suppose to be here in The U.S qualified and a citizen are allowed to vote four our people because those are our rights. So Mr. Senator please keep the ellectoral College by helping to keep it for the people of the U.S just like me ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+acdd7a7567da,2B3DBFA4579D,If we are voting for president the majority of thr votes goes to the president who earn it which says that these people of the U.S need the president they voted for which is the president who won ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fa88f3fc1a8a,2B3DBFA4579D,"In ""source 3: In defense of the electoral college:five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president"" it shows in2. Everyones President that"" The ellectoral college requirs a presidental candidate to have trans-regional appeal"". So it not possible for a president to cheat its what the people choose for them to help them so the president they choose does what the people wanted or needed. Si I argue for you to do mea fovor and vote for the ellectoral College to stay as is ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f9e5529403b,2B3DBFA4579D,"In ""source 2: The indefensible Electoral College: why even the best laid defenses of the sysem are wrong"" they tell us wee voting for someone we dont want. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+eb7bfc9de99f,2B3DBFA4579D,But that is why you learn about your electors and who they want so you choose the one whon is going for you which is your president. Its as easy as doing a little research to find out who your really electing for as president of the U.S. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+99b2e5d02551,2B3DBFA4579D,I believe that Us americans should keep the Electoral College so we can keep our rights as our nation for the people. That is what we fought for for our freedeom and our rights. So I argue Mr. Senator to favor in keeping the Electoral Collegeso we can get our electedpresidents for majority of people in the U.S. SO lets stay away from the presidents choice because that is not our rights we are the people for the people to vote for who we want as qualified citizens.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3d0fc89a59f1,2B4A794ED0D8,sould we keep the elecoral collage or should we change it to election by how many popual votes for being the president of the unioted states ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+fab06816788c,2B4A794ED0D8,"what is the callage electoral ?
+
+the electoral collage is a compromise between electing a president by voteing in congress and election of the president by how many popalar vote for qualified as to be a president.
+
+teh electoral has many process such as meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.
+
+oto be elected for president u need to have a majority of 270 electorals votes cause the electoral callage consists of 538 electors under the 23rd amendment of the constitution, the district of columbai is allocated 3 electors and trated like a statte for purposes of the electoral collage.
+
+pretty much each candidate running for president in any state has his or her own group of electors.
+
+any president thats running for election is held every fore years on the tuseday after the first monday in novermber.
+
+most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winninfg presidential candidate.
+
+elctoral collage they're not alone according to a gullup poll in 2000, taken shortly after al gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral collage won the popular. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+923d684a4c7f,2B4A794ED0D8,"the problem with electrola collage is that under the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+10dea2bcf7e0,2B4A794ED0D8,thje singel best argument against the electoral collage is whtat we might call the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4d5234d8e03,2B4A794ED0D8,we consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electtors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c10f51e7612,2B4A794ED0D8,perhaps most worrying thing is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+134b67aedff5,2B4A794ED0D8,"and the election would br thrown to the house of representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3286670759f6,2B4A794ED0D8,"at the most basic level, the electoral collage is unfair to voters ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aeebcb850fcc,2B4A794ED0D8,"because of the winner-take-all system in eavh state, bcandiadates dont spend time in state they know they have no chance of winninf-g, focusinfg only on the races in the swing states.
+
+collage method of selcting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.
+
+voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a sinle vote may decide a n election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21e279c25a34,2B4A794ED0D8,we should change the election by who has most popular votes for the president of the untied states ,Position,Adequate,,,
+93c709717a0f,2B4A794ED0D8,because it make more scence the election always go by votes and who ever have the most votes is elected for the president of the untied state. the eletoral collage system wasnt that good to many things going on i mean like it was kinad of good but not better then election on popaler votes. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1c80d831d78d,2B53D5D29EAE,"The idea of making school policy that you have to have at least a grade average of a B is a good idea, but you would have more of your star players ineligible to play because of grades. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+19915b6deb21,2B53D5D29EAE,"Now if our school was known for its brains and not sports, then yes i would encourage this but it's not. We are known for our sports winning state championships in all of the sports we offer. Changing the eligibility level to having at least a B or better, could possible shoot down every thing our school is known for and why people want to come to it ",Position,Adequate,,,
+23655373a5ea,2B53D5D29EAE,"I believe though if you must make this a rule, then you have to get the ones who aren't as smart tutors or someone to help them get the grades to play their sport. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5cbc1214249c,2B53D5D29EAE,"For other activities the I can see where having an eligibility grade of at least a B could be a good thing like ski club, that's something that you can do by yourself bu the school provid ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+37e33d84e6ff,2B53D5D29EAE,"I believe that it could be a good idea if our school was known for its grades but because it's just the opposite, we need to keep the eligibility level at a C average to maintain our reputation to those outside of school and those who may be thinking of coming to our school. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b8ac2aad9a95,2B557F0EF764,In education we always have a choice to choose rather we get our education at home or through public and private school but which one is the right choice ? Throughout this essay we will explore the pros and cons on which one is the more beneficial choice. Many kids in life go to public schools since the start of their education life but there are those that choose to get education at home. A child's personality also adds on to what the better choice might be for that certain individual. There are a lot of benefits and non-benefits to having a student attend classes from home. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+1690499703da,2B557F0EF764,I don't think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2e26660e0454,2B557F0EF764,"it will have a negative effect on motivation, lack of support ",Claim,Effective,,,
+343fe2de5c03,2B557F0EF764,prevent a student from learning valuable lessons in life ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1cad7c32394b,2B557F0EF764,"prevent them from learning about their identity. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+15fc287eca9a,2B557F0EF764,Many students in attending classes from home will face not being motivated to get their work done and also face a lack of support through difficult learning periods. Having classes at home would make being motivated to learn much harder than attending classes in school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+28b9bd4da98e,2B557F0EF764,We all at one point no longer want to continue trying to grasp how important it is to learn and be educated but with support from teachers and others we find it more insuring to continue learning and broaden our education. Learning certain lessons that are hard to comprehend without support is a difficult task. Students at home would be prone to more likely give up and not try as hard to understand the material. Unlike a student in a classroom with peers around that can help and that extra assistance of a teacher there to explain. Everyone needs that extra push in difficult times with classes at home there would be no one to constantly keep us on task and help us learn. The lack of motivation and support that is much needed are reasons on why classes from home are not beneficial to students. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+51be291db13b,2B557F0EF764,People will argue that some benefits of attending classes from home is better by stating that it prevents students from being bullied and gives students a better environment. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+798dd876d649,2B557F0EF764,Kids of all age face the chance of being bullied in their education years. There will be a chance of a student being pulled regardless of the learning environment. At home away from others may seem like it will prevent bullying but it won't. Through social media kids can be targeted and parents may not always know that this is happening because kids won't know what to do ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a71c37e4b7a,2B557F0EF764,Attending classes in school will teach students important lessons on what to do in these cases. They make students aware of bullying that can either happen in school or online and give them lessons on what to do and seek help. With classes at home kids will not know what to do and stay quiet thinking that there is no way out of a bullying situation. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7f6562a7808e,2B557F0EF764,"A good environment is always wanted for a child who is getting their education but an environment at home even though it looks beneficial may not always be the case. Having a student attend classes at home takes their chances of learning social skills that are gained through public schools and interactions. Through classes in schools students learn to work with others and gain skills that will help in the future with co-workers and everyday life. Classes at home make an oppressive environment where a student doesn't gain these skills which in the end will effect how well they can interact with others in society. In the end, attending classes in school is much better than online because of how it helps with bullying and teaches student important social skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e6a8ae186d61,2B557F0EF764,Finally attending classes at home keeps a student from developing their identities and learning more about themselves ,Claim,Effective,,,
+19ca569e80e5,2B557F0EF764,"In life we always struggle to learn new things about ourselves and broaden who we are. Through challenges students face in school and the friends they make better help them understand who they are and develop their identities. Interactions in schools, different friend groups, and learning about the world in classes with others help students shape their identities. Students learn new perspectives from others and get to choose whether to agree or disagree but with online classes we don't have all these opportunities that help students develop their identities and broaden who they are. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c36ae5c2de58,2B557F0EF764,"Attending classes in school gives students chances to better learn about themselves by providing classes in the arts, technology, cooking, management, and much more ",Claim,Effective,,,
+637c62549940,2B557F0EF764,These classes in different areas help students learn about who they are and gives them a chance to explore and also give them social skills. Online classes restricts a student from exploring and learning what they like or dislike to do which will have negative effects when they seek a career. Attending classes from home is not beneficial because it keeps a student from developing their identities and learning about themselves. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+2e7304098032,2B557F0EF764,"Students will face many hardships in life but through going to school and attending classes in school they will learn valuable lessons and learn about themselves. A student will face being unmotivated but with help support from peers and teachers they will get through those times. Online classes are not beneficial to a student because it prevents them from gaining social skills and makes it harder from them to go out in the world. Even though, it may seem like online classes will prevent bullying and be a better environment that is not the case. It will hurt the student more by them not knowing what to do in cases of being bullied and also keeping them in an oppressive environment away from others. Classes in school help shape a students identity, helps them learn about themselves, and the world. In conclusion, attending classes from home is not more beneficial because of the lack of motivation, lack of support, and how it doesn't help shape a students identity. What do you think is more beneficial for a student online classes or classes in school?          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+48d02eee771d,2B568E2031B1,Have you seen our earth? It needs help ,Lead,Effective,,,
+fc645dd11ebb,2B568E2031B1,That's why i think you should make kids do community service! ,Position,Effective,,,
+fadb350e65c2,2B568E2031B1,It will make our earth cleaner ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a101f6db8d99,2B568E2031B1,"Well to start off, i think kids should do community service is because all kids do when they get home from school is watch television and play video games ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fadb0113614e,2B568E2031B1,But with everyone coming together we could make this place a more efficient place to be upon ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a6f9955ca00,2B568E2031B1,"I also know some kids wont be happy about this, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5799c5db1af1,2B568E2031B1,but when they realize they are working together to help the community they should feel better about themselves ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+2059eed29e1d,2B568E2031B1,Kids should get out of the house more often and help out with the environment. I hope kids start getting out more to help out our healthy world. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a003ade88721,2B568E2031B1,"In addition, I think there are plenty of things to do outside! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18cb9b813689,2B568E2031B1,"A couple examples to do outside would be to pick up trash or tutor someone. If you pick up trash, people might notice and they will stop throwing stuff out of there car window. They also might help pick up trash. If you help someone else they other person will benefit with a better education, that will be needed for a good job later in life, or the kids might be nice to other people since you were nice to them! You might want to do other things that i didn't mention, and that is fine! As long as you make it to were the kids at SCHOOL_NAME do community work, this planet will be looking good in no time! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0c6fc2e7f1d,2B568E2031B1,"Last but not least, I think it is good to help out. You can get a lot by helping others! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3985c189c0a3,2B568E2031B1,"If you do sports or something in that category then you could be recognized at the end of the season for volunteering outside of school. This could be useful if you want to do something and you have a good back ground! Getting recognized for helping out is a great way you could be a better person! TEACHER_NAME if you let children help out, it will be great for them! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f7085159c7b,2B568E2031B1,"In conclusion, I told you it would be a good thing for the kids so they are not at home watching television and playing video games all day! Then i also told you there are plenty of things to do outside for the environment! Finally i told you it would be good for kids to help out with the outside world, not just in school! I no it'll take time away from school, and we need our education but if you think about it kids may want to help out, some might just be to afraid to say something! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+14bfa393c7e0,2B683EE1691A,"Students bring cell phones to school for either 2 reasons, 1 is for texting in class, and 2 is so incase something happens they can call there parents ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3dd695f1b6c4,2B683EE1691A,I think it is ok for kids to bring there phones to school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+71be8481e18e,2B683EE1691A,but if they are texting someone or playing with it in class you should take it right away because they aren't even aloud to play with it or text on it in class. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1659cbd3ee32,2B683EE1691A,when they say to turn off your phones in class the students really don't turn them off ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39ee5e438397,2B683EE1691A,"they either hide it from you when it makes a sound, or they turn it on silent or on vibrate so when they get a text no one can hear it or if someone calls them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d115d53d7fd,2B683EE1691A,My opinion is to allow students to bring there cell phones to school and to turn them off when in class but they should be allowed to use them if they need to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+211c60ebc16d,2B683EE1691A,"but would have to ask the teacher and they can only be calling their parents or any other close family members, or their guardian. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fd594e4e247,2B683EE1691A,If they are not calling their close family members or parents then take the phone away and call their parents and tell them about it and tell the student to com get it from the office after school is over. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc25c987bb26,2B683EE1691A,The reason I want to be able to have phones at school is so that we can have a way to call are parents with are phone because there might be something wrong. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4bad10899b8,2B683EE1691A,But If we call from the school then are parents might not answer because they might not know it is the school or they just don't want to talk to the school right now. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0d2d59ec401,2B683EE1691A,This is why we need phones at school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6f729e7a32bc,2B7612A3D793,Electoral College should be abolished ,Position,Effective,,,
+625d08f08bae,2B7612A3D793,because the electors may help ruin the president election ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d6f33374969a,2B7612A3D793,large states are not vistied or spoken to from the president other than small states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8562162b51ad,2B7612A3D793,Sources from source 2: The Indefensible Electoral college: why even the best - laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumet. Reason 1  explains that many electors could ruin the president campaign and Reason 2 states many elector go for big states to cast in more votes other than small states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77751aec634d,2B7612A3D793,"Many may not realize but when they vote they're not voting for the president, they're voting for state electors ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fc1483e4f80c,2B7612A3D793,"for example ""each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee"" although each party chooses a trusted elector many can betray the party and select the other party. Also the betray can cost the presdient election dearly for instance Bradford stated "" back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. kennedy.(So that a popular vote for kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy)"". In other words the electors can ruin the president campaign and may cost most of the states problems. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6067ffc4f9d8,2B7612A3D793,The electors want to cast in more votes from big states other than small states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3149970e15d,2B7612A3D793,"Source 2 quoted "" Because of the -take- all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. Even though you would like to vote for your campaign the electors may not even visit other sates because they may think the other campaign has a better shot at getting more votes, but they do not know that maybe spoken words for the president may get more votes. also many may not even see any ad for the campaign, for example "" During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad."" The author explains that many electors don't even see most staes because they are small states and they may not get as much votes compared to larger states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d4614c4006f6,2B7612A3D793,"Electoral College should be abolished because the electors may help ruin the president election and large states are not vistied or spoken to from the president other than small states. Electoral college may seem an unfair disadvantage for most voters many of their campaign that they want to win can be rather at a disadvantage or advantage depending on their electors,  many electors may betray their campaign because they're not pubilicly held in office. Lastly the disadvantage is that many voters want to see what and how they are going to change or improve their well being, but most electors and campaigns do not visit the states that want view and know the candidates better. The electoral College should be abolished for the matter of the voter and the United States of America. In my opinion we should be allowed to vote on our own, for example instead of voting for an elector we should just vote on the type of campagin whose better and meet our daily bases needs.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+35e8c688eff3,2B8301B2C7B7,"To keep or not to keep the electoral college , that is the question ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dab082909b22,2B8301B2C7B7,Everbodys ansewer is different but my ansewer is to abolish it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0e534968e7fd,2B8301B2C7B7,"This system did work in the 17th to about the late 19th centrrey but now now in this day and age the old system is like the gamecube , it had a good run and serived it's purpose but now its time to move on to better and more up to date system . Now thats out of the way lets see what should the new system could possably be . 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a62c73fa9e80,2B8301B2C7B7,"First up , by the people of the U.S.A. . What I mean by that is the poplare vote . With this system everyone's vote matter ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bec76431c2c,2B8301B2C7B7,Lets say that to win the vote you have to have ten thusand ore votes than your oppint or something like that . I really don't know the best way to do the voting system but this could should be solved by the gonverment and not the high school student that is writing this . Other than that lets move on . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9ded1d5e3763,2B8301B2C7B7,"Next one up , Repesitives . I know there is something like this but do this base on population . Like for every 10,000 there is one repesitive or something like that . This could be a cleaner and faster system than the one in the first paragraph ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8089d6feebb4,2B8301B2C7B7,Both of the system mainly focus on the people so you can't do wrong with ether of this systems . Thatsall I have to say about this system . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce76a51a4931,2B8301B2C7B7,"Now the moment you been waiting for , update the old system ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac1119b14643,2B8301B2C7B7,Sometimes all you have to do is update the old system . The system is out datted but if you update it you could make it better . It may or may not work work but you do this right this system could last the U.S.A. a nother 300 years . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ad4e9b05a1ee,2B8301B2C7B7,"In conclusion , this is what you could do to replace the system . There are many more but to me this are the three best systems I can think of so I hope you agree with me . Other than that I wish you farlwell . ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c3003be1cefd,2B8374B25171,I think the Electoral Collage is unfair to the citizens of the United States of America. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43bb6a2a37a1,2B8374B25171,The Electoral collage resembles too much control by the United States government ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e9c754e9a71,2B8374B25171,"As said in Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, ""Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. This dosnt even sound right does it... This is one example of United States government trying to rail  the presidential elections, and i can asure you that this is not the first time this has been attempted by the government. The U.S Constitution delcares that
+
+ALL
+
+citizens of United States of America have the right to vote. What this looks like is the government trying to vote for us ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b79a149d1ac,2B8374B25171,Another thing that i do not get about the Electoral Collage is why are we voting for the elector instead of just towards the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c76cadee135b,2B8374B25171,I get that they have to monitor the votes but arnt we already using electronic computers to vote... I think voting would go alot smoother if the votes went strait to the presidents through computers instead of having an elector who has a strong personal opinion against one political party who has a chance of twisting the votes around to strongly support the political party that he/she is opinionized towards. This why the Electoral Collage is dangerous. There have been cases of law breaking electors twisting the votes around. It is alot more safe to just let the citizens to just strait up vote. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+c6f9e07ae01a,2B8374B25171,"In source 3, It tries to tell you all the possitive things about the Electoral Collage. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+437a8d4500a9,2B8374B25171,The possitive things they mention about the Electoral Collage are small compared to the issues with it. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e5f078fe325d,2B8374B25171,The Electoral Collage is outdated and needs to be taken off. It is just unfair now. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bcf575c8a985,2BB1B9853257,Community service is very important. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+21500f52bde6,2BB1B9853257,"I however, believe every student should give some effort to help out. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef22be381bea,2BB1B9853257,"Such as, cleaning up trash and litter around the playground or parking lot. Also even around non school-related places such as local parks or even your own neighborhood. They could start their own way to help-out with their friends by making a internet site or group.
+
+You can send out letters to their parents to help get them involved too and make it family related. Also placing more recycling bens rather than trash cans around the school would be great too. A few posters and handouts might also get the idea into their young minds. Emails, billboards, or signs on trucks would also help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c93e28de88be,2BB1B9853257,Making it a requirement would be best so that the ones who wouldn't do it if it was optional had to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96c0b76d5575,2BB1B9853257,"If everyone did community service whether it is cleaning up litter, recycling, or even starting a club to help out, then the world would be better and so would the school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9e052966790,2BB1B9853257,Grades should even go up too. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5d7884304a20,2BB1B9853257,If every student was helping out it could change attitudes which would help their level of effort to raise their grade point averages. If it would also make them closer to their families with their parents and other siblings that also go to that school then they would all be closer and happier. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+045afb086019,2BB1B9853257,"The idea to make community service a requirement might inspire other schools and they might to the same. Soon after that nation wide students would be less lazy, higher grade point averages, and family communication would go up all from your school choosing to do this. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cc37531ed0fa,2BB4BFD96ABE,I am in favor of keeping the Electoral College or changing it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c96bbbb455ab,2BB4BFD96ABE,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. It is very rare that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+06eea03d9dc5,2BB4BFD96ABE,"The U.S Chamber of Commerce and some others agreed to abolishing the electoral college. Because of the quirks of the electoral college, won the popular vote but the electoral college still has its defenders. The electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in return elect the president. Although the electoral vote may be unfair to voters it gives the president a better chance of winning the election. There is a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral Colege vote but not likely for the popular vote. For this is because the winning candidates share of the Electoral vote exceeds it's share of the popular vote. For exemple, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romney, in the 2012's election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3608ba6d9a26,2BB4BFD96ABE,"The Electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal. If you are a regional favorite, as Romney was in the South, there is no need to campaign big in those states becuase no region has enough electoral votes to elect president. Therefore, Romney gains no electoral votes by increasing his popularity in states he knows he will win. It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state but, have a less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a polital preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6d4cc497408d,2BB9A0AD9F82,The Electoral College is something that should be kept for our government voting system. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7d225f9e344f,2BB9A0AD9F82,"When people vote for the president and are not really voting for their president they want, they should be able to directly vote for the person they want to win. With the Electoral College in place, you are not able to do so. Their should be two forms of voting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc445ab60aa4,2BB9A0AD9F82,"When the poll is taking place, people should place their votes and have those be shipped off to the Electoral College and have the votes be taken there. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4942ddc3358c,2BB9A0AD9F82,"But, their should be another copy for the votes to be casted directly to the election. This will help when someone wins electoral vote and loses national popular vote and the other way around. It can still happen to where someone wins elecotoral votes and wins national popular vote. With this method, their will be fewer debate over who should truly be the president they choose. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+689a72142f7c,2BB9A0AD9F82,"If any of these options are off of the table, then their should be a law that their should be no winner-takes-all majority voting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9a8a61c7a72,2BB9A0AD9F82,"When 49% of the state want one president to win and 51% want the other, that should be equally distributed across the presidential election. When there is that little of a gap in between votes, that is the reason why people win national popular vote over electoral votes right there. People should obviously get the president that they want their country to be watched over by, but there should be a little change in how that president comes to be. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+454aaef3814e,2BB9A0AD9F82,"To be president, you need to catch the peoples eye and try to do great things for your country. People who vote for you, obviously want you to be there president and have you take care of them. When you win the electoral college votes, but lose the national popular votes, that means you have lost the election. This is another reason why the winner-takes-all majority vote for the electoral college should be taken off of the table.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c25e785f61e,2C0023E82D72,"For years, students have gone to school in a typical classroom setting; however, an increase in technology has led to a rise in the amount of students opting to take online classes. The argument is whether these online classes are as beneficial to a student as a traditional classroom setting would be. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+220f517f1477,2C0023E82D72,"I argue that online school is not as benefical to a student; instead, online classes can wind up being detramental to a students development and education. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e57136b0f339,2C0023E82D72,"Online school is less beneficial to students education because there are more distractions at home than in a controlled classroom setting, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+533d513a0073,2C0023E82D72,"students do not have as much human interaction, hindering character development, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1f019b8f6051,2C0023E82D72,"and students have limited resources which limits students knowledge and understanding of particualar topics. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3eb715192d48,2C0023E82D72,"Although some may argue that traditional classrooms are filled with distractions, home settings have even more distractions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+386b8b2db99f,2C0023E82D72,"Classrooms are controlled settings where students are assigned specific tasks for a particular amount of time. Teachers and administrators also try to limit distractions for students by placing strict learning policies, such as, no phones during instruction. In my IB Business Management class, my teacher, Generic_Name, disgussed the advantages and the disadvantages of working from home. One major disadvantage of working from home was the increased level of distrations, which led to an ultimate decrease in productivity amongst workers. If adults are not able to implement online working from home efficiently and effectively, how can students? Students need the rigid structure that a classroom provides. The classroom setting helps aid in developing proper work ethics that students can use in their future careers. In sum, online school could lead to a decrease in student productivity rates, which further emphasizes why online education is not beneficial to students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+25572cd444f9,2C0023E82D72,"Human interation is vital to student character development. Although some may argue that students could increase their level of human interaction through increasing their extra ciricular activities, collaborating with other students on an acidemic level is far more beneficial to students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8ec66636d9ec,2C0023E82D72,"Online schooling does not allow for students to think critically with one another. Instead, online schooling focuses on the thoughts of the student that is taking the class. This type of schooling could be detrimental to young students who grow up with this form of education. Online schooling does not allow for students to see other peoples viewpoints, it instead, teaches students that only their opinion matters; a mindset that is difficult to revert. Being singleminded in a workplace could make a person difficult to work with. Thus, decreasing the chances of maintaining a healthy job environment and relationship with co-workers. Furthermore, in a classroom setting, students interact with one another daily, teaching students the importance of communication while also building character. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97c47906c269,2C0023E82D72,"Some like to argue that online school gives students more freedom to explore new topics, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7ad58032029f,2C0023E82D72,"however, online school does not give students the same hands-on-experience that the students in the classroom may recieve. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+69941c3c98e4,2C0023E82D72,"For example, if a student were to be taking an IB Chemistry course online, the student might only do simulation labs online instead of physically munipulating the chemicals in lab. Although simulations are a sufficient way to gain knowledge on a particular topic, hands-on training and experimentation, in the classroom, are far more effective ways for students to gain knowlegde and understanding of how different elements function ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+baf98ce7aab8,2C0023E82D72,"With online students not having the same resources that students in the classroom have access to, this puts the online learners at a disadvantage, which only furthers my argument that online school is less beneficial to students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2850d2b828e1,2C0023E82D72,"
+Eventhough online school has a few advantages, ultimatelty the disadvantages including: increased distractions, little character development, and limited growth in knowledge becasue of lack of resources, out weighs the positives. Traditional classroom style teaching allows students to learn and grow both acidemically and also in their character development, whereas online school hinders acidemic and character growth within students. These traits are part of the foundation that makes a person, so with online schoool limiting those traits, it cannot be as beneficial as traditional classroom teaching is.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c44543285a45,2C021FD670EB,I think students should be tasked for community service rather at a high school than rather a middle school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0fd15710fa55,2C021FD670EB,One of my reasons is that students would get better advantages of getting community service at a high school rather than getting more disadvantages at a middle school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bd7766087463,2C021FD670EB,reason is that students that are going to volunteer for community service is that they get more opportunities at doing community service at lets say for example a swimming pool and you could volunteer as a life guard and you can help clean the high ways for litter than just doing community service at your own school rather like middle school you can only do community service only on the school campus rather than doing it someplace else. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8df84a78b794,2C021FD670EB,Another reason is that lets say for example you have to earn 20 hours of community service to pass a high school class and you can do those hours on the school days or the weekend unlike middle school you receive 15 hours of community service and you do it possibly every day but ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02c071d817b0,2C021FD670EB,it can mess up study time. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d0c7e6867c6c,2C021FD670EB,"the reason that you should have students do community service at a high school is because you can socialize, work, and you can meet different people in the process and make them as friends rather than helping the same person that you already know. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4a6dc530f793,2C0A4D88629E,I believe policy 2 is a good choice for a cell phone policy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea6a0bd4be52,2C0A4D88629E,we didn't come to school to talk and gossip with our friends we came to learn. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e175198b83ab,2C0A4D88629E,"When most people use there phones, or text there usually talking bad about other people, and hurting there feelings behind there back and not telling them. That's were most people get hurt and verbally abused by who they thought were there close friends, but found out that there not and I think that school is the one place that cell phones should not be aloud to be used. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8ec38e723d2,2C0A4D88629E,All these fancy electronic devices like i pods cell phones and i phones are just distractions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+412c892010b8,2C0A4D88629E,and ways to talk to people without actually talking but you will get in trouble if you get caught texting someone during class. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+14cae3eb23ce,2C0A4D88629E,"So i believe that schools should keep people from having phones at school because some people came to learn and get smart and don't want the distraction of a phone keeping them from learning or doing a good job on tests, quizzes, and home work ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b784c6d11ea1,2C0A4D88629E,That is what I believe should be the schools cell phone policy because phones are unneeded in a place you are learning at. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1a2f6bf375b4,2C1337136521,"In our society, technology is advancing significantly by the day. What was once a letter that took 10-day trip overseas to its appropriate destination is now just a simple text message that reaches a person within seconds. The automobile is an innovation that has also advanced dramatically, enough to the point where almost every person who can afford to have one does because of its necessity when transportation becomes a factor. The idea of a car becoming ""driverless"" is simply another boost in the technology available to cars today, as discussed in ""Driverless Cars are Coming."" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+279666bc932b,2C1337136521,"Due to its many benefits, driverless cars are a positive additon to our society. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+c491bf4c78df,2C1337136521,Driverless cars offer a multitude of benefits for any passengers that might use them for transportation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+308962d7dc39,2C1337136521,"For one, the necessity to have to buy or pay off a car would essentially cease to exist. If computer-operated vehicles were capable of driving in all areas, then what would the need for having your own car be? Even if the car wasn't ""fully automated"" and the driver would have to take over at some point, the less work you have to do, the more time you have to work on something else. The article addresses this topic ""Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays."" The biggest asset that the consumer gains from a driverless car is time, while still being transported in a safe and reliable vehicle. This reinforces the advantages available to consumers who use a driverless car. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+832e66bf69de,2C1337136521,"Speaking of safety, there is not a vehicle more safe than one that is more or less ""automatic. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d87c13e658d,2C1337136521,"With autmoated cars, drivers will be able to transport themselves without having to add the extra element of driving into a day that might be stressful. However, not all cars are fully capable to driving themselves yet without driver assistance. The good news? This innovation still grants a tremendous amount of safety to the driver in charge. The features previously cited as being used as tiem fillers can also be quickly changed to inform the driver that they need to take over: ""Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over."" An advantage to this approach is that if all communication and distractions from within the car is shut down, then the driver has no choice but to focus on the road, another argument for the push of driverless cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f7902cea80f2,2C1337136521,"The last topic at hand with these types of vehicles skims along the lines of controversial. Liability is a very integral part of the car industry, accidents will always be an issue, as cited by the article: ""If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?"" Would smarter cars help this problem ",Claim,Effective,,,
+73339bbfdbc1,2C1337136521,"First off, it's important to acknowledge that accidents happen on the open road every day, with the primary cause being mistakes that drivers make. Therefore, manual vechicles are not necessairily dangerous, but are not as reliable as an automatic vehicle. Think about other practical additions that help consumers, such as a lifeguard on a beach. If they weren't there, would we be as safe? Probably not. Therefore, if the addition of driverless cars ensures that a safer option is available, then it only makes sense that the advantage should be taken. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7905eb20d704,2C1337136521,"In conclusion, driverless cars have brought about many new benefits in our society. From their ease of access to consumers to the top level of safety features that are sure to be made available in them, they will clearly become the top option of vehicle to use in our society once enough of them are made. This technological innovation is capable of doing many wonders in the automotive industry. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f7b8b5b2cbf9,2C20FC3AC128,Many people arent sure what to do when it comes to election. Electoral College is the process that consist of the election. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c4404f3113ca,2C20FC3AC128,I believe that Electoral College is the easist way to handle the way of voting. Any ways whats wrong with Electoral College almost half the people agree to it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bfd092f04602,2C20FC3AC128,The founding father that discovered Electoral College made it easy for anybody to be president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+68d9ff089d4a,2C20FC3AC128,Many people also agree with me because according to source 2 it says that in case of the election it will be thrown to the House of Representatives where the delegations vote on the president. This way the delegation people can pick who's good for president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c67d93172934,2C20FC3AC128,On the other hand many people belive that Electoral College is unfair to some people. Many people want to abolish Electoral College. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1f4662738aec,2C20FC3AC128,"Secondly, the Electoral college is widely regared as an anachronism a non- democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be declared the candidate who recives the most popular votes ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+766f80010f5a,2C20FC3AC128,The electoral restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states by the population lose by virtue of the mal- apportionment of the senate. The Electoral college avoids the problem of the elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc65874a6691,2C20FC3AC128,In conclusion I think that Electoral College should stay and it will make things easier for all these reasons I listed from the sources. Also all the presidents will have a chance to become what they want to be.            ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c5c64d9ef89,2C2CF03355C9,"Imagine, the streets of Sparta,New Jersey clean as a whistle. well Lately some of my friends have been performing community service. They have been saying how important this was to our community. While my other friends said this was a huge waste of time and takes away from things they want to do ",Lead,Effective,,,
+513a11fd99d0,2C2CF03355C9,I believe that community service is the right thing to do ,Position,Effective,,,
+0f13337dbb77,2C2CF03355C9,For one it will look good on the students diplomas for college ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+569189470c79,2C2CF03355C9,It will also make students more looked upon by kids and adults. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+703b0c48337a,2C2CF03355C9,Lastly it will make the streets of Sparta clean as a whistle. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f0ca47f711c,2C2CF03355C9,When a college goes to accept a child they don't just look at grades. They look at what extra curricular activities they do. Community service shows the colleges that the kids will help out society if they want. This is also an EXTRA curricular activity so they weren't forced to do this. They did it because they wanted to and that is a great way to look at a student. The kids will also be more likely to be accepted by higher ranked college. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+fb3ef73c303a,2C2CF03355C9,"The adults always get mad when the kids are skateboarding through the mall and are almost hitting people. If they do the community service the adults will like the kids more because they are helping out the community. The kids also look up to older kids. For example, if they see an older kid picking up garbage of the road or even just a brother they will want to be big like them and do the same thing as them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d3b1b3a71e37,2C2CF03355C9,"The streets of some towns not just Sparta are not always clean. If the kids start to pick up the trash on the side of the road the streets will get cleaner. It could also effect those who through their trash out their car window. For example, they might say wow look what I'm making these kids do. I'm making them cleanup after me. This could get someone like that to stop throwing their trash out a window and start putting it in a trash can. It could also inspire them to help out or support the cleanup. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a27b8c358e68,2C2CF03355C9,"In conclusion, community cleanup is a good idea. For one it will look good on kids diploma for college. It will also make more respected by adults and children. Lastly it will help make roads and sidewalks clean to walk on and no flying debris. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c830ead77858,2C469434A463,I think that letting students bring cell phones to school is a good idea. We should be able to let the students use them at lunch time and any other free time we have. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e0cdf11266ed,2C469434A463,Cell phones are a privilege and if the students over use this privilege I think it should be tooken away. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4365e9a759b,2C469434A463,This policy is better because students will feel like this school is giving them a opportunity to be free and that the school trusts their them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dbd2d4686b18,2C469434A463,"There are some down sides to this also there might me more drama because students can tell more stuff to their friends, but there's goods that follow with it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb4b5d27ef57,2C469434A463,"Students may pay more attention in class and wont have the need to text in class and, pay more attention and getting better grades. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+95fdb6708246,2C469434A463,Students will also feel less concerned about teachers taking away there phones and will feel happy that the school has opened up to most of the students needs and will give the school a good rep. . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d682960f4fe,2C469434A463,"So this is the best choice of what to do and thanks for reading. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+116865c07b46,2C7750B811F3,I think you should make the community service an elective for the 8 grade students ,Position,Effective,,,
+d4b10c1d8962,2C7750B811F3,you can give them a high school credit and for the 7th grade you can just give them a good grade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7145f28b82b9,2C7750B811F3,Other thing that you can do is to tell the people that want to help to came in the afternoon then tell them to tell their friends to came that you will give them an extra grade. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+690ad38815c0,2C7750B811F3,You can make an enouncement with their parents telling the parents about the community service ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+25bb2b12110c,2C7750B811F3,I know that the parents will tell them to do it because hey can make every thing they want in the week end. You can send a letter but not giving it to the students send an email or something like that but never give ti to the student because they will trough it in the trash. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf68c68a8f0e,2C7750B811F3,You can make a field trip to an elementary school or to a hospital and you can help the people first then tell them too. For the students that wants to be a teacher they will be happy if you take them to an elementary school and for the students that want to be a doctor they will be happy helping in the hospital. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0e95c4ad8f8,2C7750B811F3,There are too much different way to tell the to help the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e00b7d04dfc,2C78AF6ADD75,I feel like we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Effective,,,
+0f66f5b183de,2C78AF6ADD75,"""A disput over the outcome of a electoral college vote is possible but, it is less likely than a dispute over the popular vote"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83fce4eb777a,2C78AF6ADD75,This means that that people would argue over the electoral college vote and who they voted for but but people most likely would not argue over the popular vote. They have done this before in 2012's election prosses with Obama and Romney. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5522c0f43072,2C78AF6ADD75,everyone will have to put ads up because not just one region of votes will make them president they are going to need to advertise everywhere. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a8973b5b6c5e,2C78AF6ADD75,"The third reason is that ""the winner-take-all method of awarding Electoral votes induces the canidates"" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+78109c4a734a,2C78AF6ADD75,This means to me that the method helps the canidates so they can win easily. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+81cadfa8bdcd,2C78AF6ADD75,The fourth and final reason is that the big staes get more votes because they have more people in there country so the automatically get more attention from the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3c06b4e853f,2C78AF6ADD75,It is also easier for them to get what they want meaning they can reallly like choose any president they want and its a high percenatge that they will get that president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1dd4ebc65c67,2C78AF6ADD75,Those are only some of the reasons that i think we should keep the Electoral College. To me I feel it would be easier to just do this other than count all the votes frome every single voter. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea315a138714,2C8521890B5A,"Presient Richard Nixon, and President Bill Clinton both have something in common; they won their presidencies with the Electoral College, not the popular vote. (According to ""In Defense of the Electoral College: five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. Paragraph 22) Richard and Bill only won 43% of the popular vote against their opponents while they were running for office. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c2d11ca43832,2C8521890B5A,This is why the United States needs to keep the Electoral College instead of switching to the popular vote for the elections. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ea0766f84b8,2C8521890B5A,"Now you're probably wondering, does high school students even know what the Electoral College is and what it's job? Yes, high school students do know what the Electoral College is and what it does. The Electoral College is made up of 538 electors. Your state amount equals one member from the House of Represenatives and two from the Senate. The electors are chosen from the candidate's political party. The Electoral College decides the president and vice president every four years every Tuesday ater the first Monday in the month of November. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34809d571b0c,2C8521890B5A,the Electoral College needs to stay instead of the popular vote because when you have the Electoral College you will get an outcome from it unlike the popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6d94fb61ecc,2C8521890B5A,"Almost all states have the ""winners take all"" method which according to ""What is te Electoral College"" by the Office of the Federal Regisiter (Paragraph 7) this method is when all electors are awarded to the presidental candidate that is winning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a73ea823b5f,2C8521890B5A,Also the popular vote overrides the popular vote ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c790f7638c04,2C8521890B5A,"In ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"" by Richard A. Posner (Pararaph 18) the 2012 presidental campaign for example it was the battle between Mitt Romney who is a Republican against Barack Obama who is a Democrat. Obama received only 51.3 percent of the popular vote and Obama got 61.7 percent of the Electoral College ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d270c365e4f9,2C8521890B5A,As you can see the Electoral College overrided the popular vote which ultimately made him president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6c2a21f9277,2C8521890B5A,"Also in ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the Presiden"" (Paragraph 22)take Richard Nixon's and Bill Clinton's presidental campaign. Those two only won 43% of their popular votes but they won their elections with the Electoral College. Without the Electoral College all three of these presides wouldn't have become President of the United States. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7cd520d89e30,2C8521890B5A,"To continue on, the Electoral College should stay instead of the popular vote since one region of the United States doesn't have enough power of the Electoral Votes to make a presidental candidate win ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b6251a642d4,2C8521890B5A,"Look at ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"" Mitt Romney doesn't campaign in the South part of the United States since he knows that he is popular in that region with the electors he doesn't bother camapigning there since he knows he will win their votes. But he has to campaign to other states and regions since he knows the South doesn't have enough power to make him president. And with that comes your swing states and the big states. Swing states listen to what the presidental candidates have to say since they are toss-up states. These swing states literally can ""swing"" the election. These are the states that are going to decide who the next president is. And that ties in with your big states; California, Texas, Florida, New York, and Pennsylvania are some of your big states since they have the most population out of the United States. These states can also be swing states since they have the most votes out of every state. With the power of the popular vote a presidental canidate can become president, and other regions will not have a say. But using the Electoral College that can't happen. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fd28ed81a7b5,2C8521890B5A,"On the other hand, according to ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" (Parargraph 14) the Electoral is outdated, irrational, and unfair ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d8972db7d8e3,2C8521890B5A,"In ""The Inefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer key names such as Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, AFL-CIO and the U.S. Chamber of Commerece all want to get rid of the Electoral College and use the Popular Vote. Look at the presidency that was in 2000 with Al Gore against George W. Bush. Al Gore would have won the election if the election was based on the popular vote. He won the popular vote with over 60%! But unfortunately, he didn't win and lost to George W. Bush since Bush won the Electoral College votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4961fd6770ac,2C8521890B5A,"But some people don't really know what they are voting for in election which is why the Electoral College is the way to go. Also people complained with the ""winners take all method"" some candidates don't go to certain states and only focus on the swing states. In the 2000 campaign seventeen out of fifty states didn't see the candidates. But the candidates didn't go to those states since they knew they had no chance of winning those states and they needed to focus on the swing states to make sure they win the election. Many people do call the Electoral College an anachronism, but it doesn't need to stick in the past, it needs to be kept in the present and in the future. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+89d55b261740,2C8521890B5A,"the United States needs to keep the Electoral College instead of the popular vote because you will always have an outcome and one region can't overpower another and make a candidate win the presidental campaign. Yes, as said before many people want to get rid of the Electoral College but it will stay with the United States and move forward with us people. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cccfdbfc337e,2C8EA34FDC34,In my opinion you should just leave the Electoral college system the way it is. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b88404456707,2C8EA34FDC34,I think you should leave it like how it is because nobody gets to over come power. Everyone in the electoral system have the same amount of power. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b8e3daa9944,2C8EA34FDC34,"Its keeps everything organized. There is no problem in it, everyone like the way it is but there are couple of people that really don't go along with it. Some of the people that don't go along as what the electoral system says because they like having power. They don't care what the people got to say, they are only worried about having that power and changing the system ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76422d39b754,2C8EA34FDC34,If they every change the system to popular votes for the president it would be a honest choice ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a3a9d8eee53a,2C8EA34FDC34,"I say that because everyone gonna choice a person then other people is going to count and give out the number, whoever has the highest number win. So I think it would be a honestly choice, but in the system everything is organized, everything is already known. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+32af5291c6d7,2C8EA34FDC34,This has been done for the longest. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4552d14acf43,2C8EA34FDC34,"Other president already used the electoral system and it wouldn't be fair to use this other system to choose the new president. Everyone knows already what there job is, and if they would have to change it people would be confused. There going to have to start again from fresh. People being not sure if they doing it right or wrong, and it would take longer to choice a president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79486d68adaa,2C8EA34FDC34,"i still think that the electoral system is a way better way to help choose a president. There is step to choosing him. There are people that already know what to do with there job, its easy for them. So many times they did it that they are professional at doing it. If we would change it, like I already said they would be confuse, lost. In my opinion the electoral system is way better an easier. Everything is known and better. Its in the constitution ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dd9c19bb5483,2CCC9DCFE253,I do not favor in keeping the Electoral college. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3a52bb6a4db5,2CCC9DCFE253,What I favor is changing electoral college to election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9622a233a7f7,2CCC9DCFE253,I think that election by popular vote is  very fair and even. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a8e4a420a71,2CCC9DCFE253,Electoral College can  control who their electors vote  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a4c0e5ce5bb,2CCC9DCFE253,it is unfair to the other elector becuse they have no chance of winning the election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+656f45a411f2,2CCC9DCFE253,"Consider that state legislature are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors always defy the will of the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f84bb6941fb,2CCC9DCFE253,The electoral college is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24863c76b2b5,2CCC9DCFE253,"The electoral college is unfair because the winner take all system in most states  they do not have any chance in winning. The electoral college is just outdated, and very irrational. We should abolish the electoral college it is a uncompetitive way for competeing for president. Everyone deserves a fair and even chance and by the electoral college is not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0cc4138fb83,2CCC9DCFE253,Popular votes is a non democratic method of selecting a president that gets the the positon with the most electoral votes. It is the electors who elect the president not the people ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8c60b039e13,2CCC9DCFE253,Everyone has a right to vote for who they would like or trust as president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f7c5e65704a,2CCC9DCFE253,However it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+aa9e363f941e,2CCC9DCFE253,Whe you vote for president your are actually have a part in who you would like. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+f654e9bca518,2CEA555561C1,Dear state senator i am writing to you because i would like to try a different way to select the president by using the popular. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89dee94c5497,2CEA555561C1,"most states have a ""winner-take-all"" that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. the electoral college is just a process where election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. the electoral college process consists of the selction of the electors the meetin of the electors where tey vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8fdf949631b5,2CEA555561C1,"when using the electoral college system to vote you voters vote not for president,but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president. the single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5bc582e2699d,2CEA555561C1,the american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century , the system allows for much worse. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+7a9c6e5e9613,2CEA555561C1,"at the most basic level the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state. the electoral college is unfair,outdated, and irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cc39b937ca8,2CEA555561C1,the most basic arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. and the arguments agianst direct elections are spurious at best. its hard to say this but bob dole was right :abolish the electoral college! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8fbb7cec9dcf,2CEA555561C1,"The electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism,   ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89cf57a4e4ba,2D011A75157A,I infact am not for Electoral College or changing election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1b8c59918410,2D011A75157A,"I don't like that if you vote for one person, the rest comes with, that's rediculous, what if I want this president but not all his stupid underseers, then what? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f21bf511ef90,2D011A75157A,"Another thing,  I also dont love how they get to choose a giant room full of democratic dictators, and have them vote, and if they vote differently than the people, then we are forced to go with their choice. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ebf6abf8579,2D011A75157A,"That completley demolishes the idea of our freedom of voting. If they dissagree your gonna throw it to the representatives before back to the people who are the real back bone of this country?!?!""Perhaps the most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where the state delegations vote on the president.""
+
+""The American pople should conciderthemselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. Concider that the state legislatures are techinically responsible for picking electors, and those electors could always defy the people."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ecfd696ab3cb,2D011A75157A,"I myself am a libertairian and i dont much like that this test is asking of me to do something storngly against my belifs and i just think is plain aweful.
+
+All government is inefective and should be dissolved. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+936ab432071b,2D5869DE8592,"Wyat Gibson, former scientist from NASA, 1976. Today, spacecraft one has captured a image to what looks to appear as a face. Scientist figured it was just another Martain mesa. ""Only this one photo had unusaul shadows that made it look like an Egyptain Pharoh. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c73af1e389fe,2D5869DE8592,I predicted that it must have a degree of surpise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion lab when the face appeared on the monitiors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ca647c57309,2D5869DE8592,Some other scientist belived the face was an alien artfact. I snapped a picture ten times sharper than the oraginal Viking photos. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ff52285c2ce,2D5869DE8592,"I have done lots of reaserch, and revealed a natural landform. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d1d1477a606f,2D5869DE8592,"I reasched the photo a lot more. After a lot of rearch, I decoved that there was no alien monument after all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a79a3c00278,2D5869DE8592,"We decieded that we still did not have enough evedience. Perhaps, alien markings were hidden by haze. Still there is no evedience as we continued. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ffc70cd3579,2D5869DE8592,"After more and more reasch. There is still no alien monument. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6efddae51c8b,2D5869DE8592,We decovered that the picture is acually the Martian of a butte or mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb7d5e6c4656,2D5869DE8592,They are landforms common around the American West. It's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about that same height as the face on mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55bf85cf2f00,2D5869DE8592,"In the end, there was not evedience of alien lifeform or artcraft. What we predicted might not be right, but it's defenitly not a sign of alien life. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2f9f1d37b455,2D617E37684A,We should keep the Electoral College instead of changing it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f9653860de63,2D617E37684A,One reason for keeping it is because the method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50442a073c44,2D617E37684A,"Electoral College avoids problems for example Nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only 43 percent of popular votes,while winning a majority in the electoral college 301 and 3 70 electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab9a496dd279,2D617E37684A,Another reason would be because some states are bigger then other and get more popular votes then others ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a939f1027fc3,2D617E37684A,"like Obama, who won the same amrgin in wymoing would net the winner only 3 electoral votes ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+57240d8b7ef0,2D617E37684A,"reasons to leave it like it is are Certainty of outcome, Swing States,Big States,and to avoid Run-Off Elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+088b69015f4c,2D617E37684A,Whats wrong with the electoral vote some people seem to think its fair and more efficent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+03f7d2a3205e,2D617E37684A,Some people might not like the Electoral College just becaues they might think that its not fair. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+18d82d582f15,2D617E37684A,Some States have more electoral votes given to them then other states. Such as California t has 55 and some other states only have like 3-8 electoral votes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef317f40855c,2D617E37684A,Some people might argue about this. It should be the more thoughtful voters that are able to vote. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5733558c50fb,2D617E37684A,Certainty of outcome can help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+803ecbfab07c,2D617E37684A,"In the election between Obama and Romney Obama received 61.7 percent of the election while Romney had 51.3 percent of the popular votes because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner takes all basis, evem a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state.            ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c29013624c1,2D654BBA9310,In this essay of the Electoral College it is questioning to see if the Electoral College realy works ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5c800dc7d4ef,2D654BBA9310,In my point of view I think that it does because it gives certain reasons to show it does and if it didnt work the would've changed it a long time ago so it shows you that it work and thats why its still around until this day ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2b64150c7ead,2D654BBA9310,"The Electoral College is a process , not a place. The founding fathers establised it in the consitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae7ff1e237d4,2D654BBA9310,"One of the reasons i think that the Electoral College actually works is because The Electoral College works is because it process consists of the selection of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6774f0d446f3,2D654BBA9310,"The Electoral College helps pick the president and vice president and if didnt have that then it wouldve been total chaos because with The Electoral College it is way easier and faster and is a better process , The Electoral College consists of many electors and electoral votes this is really important because under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. For This Reason, in the discussion the word state also refers to the District of Columbia.     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+96c2175c6956,2D8C767B44E7,Well i choose election because the election is a better way of letting the oters express their ideas. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1da98fb2c456,2D8C767B44E7,They could also pick wich one they think is the most proficiant ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+850787a5c477,2D8C767B44E7,Unlike the electorals they choose the people that will decide the president so there for they could and may lie to the judges and tell them a certain thing but then do a different thing that is also a well asked questions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8525c41572c1,2D8C767B44E7,Electoral could have a positive outcome sometimes as such it can have a negative outcome. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+514ad65b807e,2D8C767B44E7,Election can also have positive and negative points. But i think that election could have a better chance of succeding because of the voters. Stated in paragraph 11 says ( The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.) well there we have it people are already questioning that choice. Some proses that ties that vote could and may not be acurate. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8ab8e97cce9,2D8C767B44E7,Election also has some bad features like some might say its the most basic level but it also is unfair in some ways. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8c71e7b65fbf,2D8C767B44E7,That statement or opinion is based on each individuals point of view. We dont all look at the choices in the same way. That is very important to try to undestand each choice and look at them closely. To be honest i think both have good ideas but election has a better outcome from my point of view. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c70ae7641095,2D8C767B44E7,Electoral or Election. I say Election both are extremely simialar but also very different. Deciding a president is very important in any situation. The Outcome of choosing then turning out that it was a miss understanding is very ploral. We have to put the outcomes of both out there and examine each and every one closely. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+658ca69c6c29,2D9481E29A45,the electoral college should be changed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6dc33a24c885,2D9481E29A45,the electoral college does not really give people the right to vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4312acbcc5d1,2D9481E29A45,"they might think they are but there not in other words is taking that power off the people ,the electoral college process consist of 538 elector and only 270 electoral votes are need it to elect a president it maybe a good idea for some but is not . That is way some states have a winner-takes -all system that awards all the electors to the winning presidential candidate .We the people dont get to choose our own president under the electoral college  we only vote for a slate of electors  . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e8b05ac48ee,2D9481E29A45,We cannot always control  the elector and who might he choose thas way ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3481bc45b116,2D9481E29A45,"its official the electoral college is unfair,outdated and irrational. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3486669e1f7a,2D9481E29A45,But still some people still believe that the electoral college is a good thing for the nation ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+393ad5735730,2D9481E29A45,even if they have a tie the house of representative votes on the president not the people . ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+efb7c50077be,2D9481E29A45,"The electoral college has five reasons , retaining itself its lack of democratic pedigree ,all are practical reasons , not liberal or conservative reasons ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+515c512a1dc2,2D9481E29A45,they are there to avoid problems of election in which no candidates receives a majority of votes ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+78ff28c87635,2D9481E29A45,some say the electoral college fluctuated in the 2000 fiasco and had the biggest election crisis in the century . ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1b841a2ab252,2DBFE64834A2,I am strongly against driverless cars. I feel that whoever came up with the idea must have had some bad food or something. I wonder what encouraged them to even have the thought of a car driving itself. Having driverless cars will most likely end the human population. I am saying this because it makes me think of the movie Wall-e. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4e2fb81a40bf,2DBFE64834A2,"In the movie Wall-e there is a robot named Wall-e and earth is deserted or so wall-e thinks. One day Wall-e was doing his normal routine when he stumbled upon a pretty robot named Eve. Wall-e and Eve go on a journey to find her home/ ship, and when they do it is filled with humans. Wall-e is suprised to see the humans he thought they all were dead. Every human that he sees is sitting in a chair that can move them aournd to where ever they want, and get them whatever they want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3cc53681949,2DBFE64834A2,"They don have to get up for anything or physically move their musles. All of the people are obese. People die from obesity, obesity can cause heart problems which can cause a heart attack. Which can make you die. This is only a chair, imagine what it would be like if it was a car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+90acc1370d50,2DBFE64834A2,It would be pointless for adults and teenagers to get lisence. It would be pointless to have rules of the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55140696ab04,2DBFE64834A2,"Everything that has restriictions, or policies on drivers and their driving would be pointless and useless. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+96b4f0212065,2DBFE64834A2,"As of now we our try to stop drinking and driving. If a car drove itself few crashes but the number lives that are taken will be the same. Peopel can die from alcohol poisoning. Even now cars have malfunctions, what if the driverless car runs into another car because it couldnt stop. A few years ago a lady was on the interstate and her breaks weren't working. The emergency break wasn't even working, and she was going aroung 70 miles per hour. She only had control over the steering wheel. People wont have control over the steering wheel of the driverless car descides to malfunction. Many lives could be taken because of it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+020d28998ffb,2DBFE64834A2,This is why i am against driverless cars.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2b7b4e1acc0c,2DEC6F2AE21A,"Many people don't like the way the president is picked. They are picked by the
+
+Electoral College ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d14c3c503e3f,2DEC6F2AE21A,"I on the other hand, am fine with it. What people fail to see is that because of the electoral college , is that everything is going great, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e1703e8815fb,2DEC6F2AE21A,"it's a fair judgement, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+462521c9aa06,2DEC6F2AE21A,everything is balanced ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e95ddd59aea2,2DEC6F2AE21A,"In this moment of time people just don't seem to realize that things are fine the way they are. I mean everyone's doing their own thing and living life. Some more than others, but that's the way it has always been. There are some changes here and there but they're minor ones. People just overreact , and make it seem like a big deal when it isn't. That's just the reality of it. It's not going to change ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+753a544a5830,2DEC6F2AE21A,What a lot of people fail to realize is that it's a fair judgement. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76697b70b027,2DEC6F2AE21A,No crap about who they like better. They base it off what they think the person will do for the country. What good changes they would make in the future. The great things they could accomplish to help us as citizens of the United States. Now that's very good judgement. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92a4c5b6c0ec,2DEC6F2AE21A,"Another thing they fail to realize is that the way they pick things, everything is balanced. The elections and that stuff, is all balanced ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1faa349fa1e,2DEC6F2AE21A,"Everything they decide is based on the majority of who you guys picked also. It's not just based on their decision, it's also based on yours. They are actually part of you guys. So they do it to help you all not themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1df3f9666e25,2DEC6F2AE21A,"That's my arguement on this topic. People just fail to see that because of the electoral college, everything is going great, the judgement is fair, and everything is balanced ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ade40a0a14dd,2DF86580B7E7,"Foremost, the electoral college is a process used for selecting a president through the popular vote of qualified respesenators. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8ffea6100207,2DF86580B7E7,"The electoral college was established by our founding fathers, and still benefits us today. Using trusted representatives and efficently casting the desired vote, the electoral college is the best method of selecting a president ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9a157271adfe,2DF86580B7E7,The electoral college allows the country to be sure of an outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b240a1556606,2DF86580B7E7,no one region can elect a president on its own. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb05353187bf,2DF86580B7E7,"Electoral votes are cast by electors chosen to represent each state, these electors are ""...trusted to vote for the party's nominee..."", stated Richard Posner. This means that electors are trusted and qualified to efficiently represent the vote their state desires ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1d96acacf0c4,2DF86580B7E7,"The trust set upon electors is ""rarely betrayed"" Posner said. The last time an election was won by someone who didn't get the popular vote was in 2000, and this doesn't happen often. This is contrary to what was said by Bradford Plumer. Plumer stated ""The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91702c37ef88,2DF86580B7E7,"The electoral college gives America certainty of an outcome, without a tie, or a run-off election ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c509beb08e81,2DF86580B7E7,"The ability to rest easy knowing there will be a clear winner is an ability given to America, by the system of electoral votes.  A tie occurance in an election is ""Highly unlikely..."" Posner said. Even though most states use a ""Winner-take all"" basis, ties and run-off elections are still extremely rare and unlikely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f5e4eea43bb,2DF86580B7E7,Swing states- a debated and popular issue amog the electoral college ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28bcb0005d12,2DF86580B7E7,"Swing states are often paid more attention and given more information than regular states. While being paid more attention, the swing states together are able to determine the election's outcome. Though small states don't get much attention, they still have a say in the election.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9c0ce7a1df4,2DFE8246A388,The policy of students not being able to participate in sports or other activities unless they have B average is a praiseworthy one because it encourages students to soar academically. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3ddd2da6703a,2DFE8246A388,"First of all, those who desire to participate in extracurricular activities, which is a large portion of students, will be forced to try their hardest in school. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c83dd1677ef3,2DFE8246A388,"Putting one-hundred percent of their efforts into academic-related activities, such as studying for exams, doing their homework, etcetera, will help students in the long run.
+
+They will get better grades, go to better colleges, get better jobs, and ultimately live better lives. This policy encourages this needed hard work in school, thus, is a commendable one. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8dda7b07832f,2DFE8246A388,"Second of all, students will better grasp the concept of responsibility. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ec7f0e1b2e50,2DFE8246A388,"Responsibility is an essential factor of life, and needs to be encouraged as much as possible.
+
+To have the responsibility of trying hard in school and getting better grades, is to value the future of oneself, others, and the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c24040e56c5c,2DFE8246A388,"If schools support this idea of having the responsibility of getting good grades, then students will improve academically and intellectually. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+d90e8ace58ed,2DFE8246A388,"In conclusion, the policy in question is plausible because would contribute to the betterment of the world and its people's lives. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66fd902a4213,2DFFB145BE07,"We have been using the electoral college method for a long time now. It has brought us our ups and downs, but everything has it's cons. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+84b06e375cfc,2DFFB145BE07,I think this is a very fair method to use and that we should most definetly keep it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1c9855c606d7,2DFFB145BE07,Their is not really a lot of good arguements on why we should get rid of the electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7401469962,2DFFB145BE07,"""The single best arguement against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor."" (paragraph 11) There is only one really good arguement against this, and not a lot of people look at this as such a bad thing. Yes, people who don't want this method will use this arguement, but when someone else throws an argument backing it up they will have no rebutal to rest their case. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3010484f5883,2DFFB145BE07,"""The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President"" (paragraph 3) ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a1c6bab1e44c,2DFFB145BE07,"I know you know this already, but this statement shows how fair this method is. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+390ab5dbdef3,2DFFB145BE07,"Now with big states it is easier to recieve more votes because there is mor eelectoral votes. However, it is also very hard because you would have to persuade the state to be on your side and vote for you. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfcc79bef033,2DFFB145BE07,""" The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of te mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution . . . .
+
+The popular vote was very close in Florida [in 2012]; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin Wyoming would net hte winner only 3 electoral votes. So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does . . . .""
+
+(paragraph 21) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa1422ffe7e0,2DFFB145BE07,"All in all, this is a good system because it works very well and thier is no problem with it. I think we should keep it for as long as The United States of America can. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+051feae077ba,2E1C25D6F265,Vote for me the other guy whats to take all your money no vote for me he fail english in high school thats al you hear when its voteing time. they put them all over  like  the malls sides of roads. Its all stupid they saying things to make eachother look bad but that the end of the day no one is perfect. So what he did in his passed and in high school is just pointless to bring up. As teens and kids we do stuoid stuff but we do grow up so why bring it back up to make you feel better about your self. this is what i really dont get we the people are suppost to vote to see who will be leading us for the next four years but we really are not. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d0e43a6c0c78,2E1C25D6F265,We all vote but then if the electoral college chocies some one else that who it is so what is the point in us votin. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f85f8159d784,2E1C25D6F265,If even when we the people vote for this person and he wins with us and yall want the other guy he wins thats not fair to him or us. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08ec8b0737ca,2E1C25D6F265,It should be popular votes take all. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1984a32d1302,2E1C25D6F265,did you know that when you vote for your canidate you are actally voting for your candidates electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a89ea5a0782,2E1C25D6F265,Then our governor prepares a certificate of ascertainment they all so decllare the winning presidential candidate. I think its all just not worth it all that work for what if we could just vote on who we want and the person that gets the most votes wins.  I dont understnd why this have to have all that other stuff that is not needed. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c78502c5392,2E1C25D6F265,They say the electoral college restpres some of the weight in the political balance. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3b76e3777f36,2E1C25D6F265,They have 538 electors whats the point if we the people could just vote why i really dont understand whats the need for them the person with most votes wins i dont see why all that other stuff is nesseasy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a3b559b3a53d,2E4AFCD3987F,In the ruels of voteing there should be change. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd325547890c,2E4AFCD3987F,"When voting citesens's votes should matter, but they dont ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4565be3cdecf,2E4AFCD3987F,Whats the point of even voting when your vote doesnt help who you want to be president win. Why should people in office get to have the say? Its not fair for those pople to chose everyones prersednt . Everyone in the United Dtates should have the say of who runs them for four years. No one wants someone who they don't even like calling the shots. Also when we don't get to choose the the people that do choose make it go in there favor and not ours. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+597958ab290b,2E4AFCD3987F,This country is all of ours and sould not have all the disions made by only a few people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc4d6d45c218,2E4AFCD3987F,"Everyones vote should matter. If thers 50,000,000 for runer 1 anf 60,000,000 for runer 2 then runer 2 should win. Majority rules, and when everyone is toght that since the day theey were born then we need to live by that way. I'm not saying iif over half of the US says the everyone has to atleast have one dog in there house hold we should have to do ! I'm talking about the big things like presidesy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c34ed978200f,2E4AFCD3987F,maybe if we got to chose our president then more rules will be followed ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20f2cf8d5e1e,2E4AFCD3987F,"Whe we get to choose our presedent then we will respect him. When you respect someone then you follow what tthey have to say and dont give them crap for it. when someone you dont like is presedent why should you repect them? we sll know you wouldnt and that you would go aginst almost everything they say even if they actully do say somerting you agree about your still not going to respect them be cause tou dont like them. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d9b5a39379c5,2E4AFCD3987F,Sometimes everyone can be stoborn. And when certin people dont get whet they want then they can do bad things ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b9705a5a3ef4,2E4AFCD3987F,If someone wanted obama buit we got ramny when evryone voted for obama then people are going to be very mad becuse its wrong that we didnt get the presendnt that we wanted. riets could stgart and armys could form just because its not fair how the president is choosen. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3878c364f23d,2E4AFCD3987F,In the ruels of voteing there should be change. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+14b8d2c4525e,2E8CD9C797B3,I think that you should choose Policy 1 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8bf20a11f043,2E8CD9C797B3,because a lot of parents text their children either when they will be picked up or if they are going to be late. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cf31b3c9246,2E8CD9C797B3,"Also if you don't have phones at school and a parents tells the student that they will be here at three but they were late, then the student would be waiting outside for a long time until his/her mom or dad came to pick them up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d250daa2128,2E8CD9C797B3,"In addition, if a student is really sick and needs to go home, they can call their mom or dad on their cell phone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+474093d5b1ea,2E8CD9C797B3,"For example, I got sick in school once and I felt so bad, so I went to my locker and called my mom and asked her to pick me up from school. Another reason why we should have Policy 1 is that if you get sick and have to use the school phone to contact your parent, then you would have to remember your mom's or dad's number, and if you didn't then you can't go home and you have to toughen out the rest of the day. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4402f71b4e7,2E8CD9C797B3,"In addition, if you can have your cell phone in school then you can communicate to your family if something has happened to someone or you forgot something. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23d4388af8ec,2E8CD9C797B3,"Also if you forget something at home, then you can use your phone to see if your mom or dad would go back and get it for you. In addition, when the school has a jeans day, but you forget you can call your mom or dad to get your some casual clothes for you ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2cb43005366,2E8CD9C797B3,If you enforce the rule more and give out detentions and take away the phones if the student is using it in class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53352ad3d209,2E8CD9C797B3,then maybe some of the students would pay more attention to the rule and not use their phone during class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a10e102cb660,2E8CD9C797B3,That is why I think that you should use Policy 1. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+333941bedaa8,2EA7BBA9340E,"While many may argue for it, the Electoral College has proved to be an obselete way of electing the President. ",Position,Effective,,,
+91aaf016ea7b,2EA7BBA9340E,"It is, essentially, an indirect way for voters to choose their candidates, by voting for electors whose loyalty is not guaranteed. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+093f886d48af,2EA7BBA9340E,"The Electoral College vote can override the popular vote, as seen in the 2000 Presidential Election. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cedcc7593158,2EA7BBA9340E,"Some say that the Electoral College is a system worth keeping, because it provides a certain outcome and avoids run-off elections, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3bcb51cec9c2,2EA7BBA9340E,yet these arguments are founded on little reason. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+096efc26cb79,2EA7BBA9340E,"Undoubtedly outdated, this system is a catastrophe in the works, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+29c31fc4316b,2EA7BBA9340E,"the 2000 election only a glimpse of the chaos that could result from the Electoral College. The disaster factor is a strong argument against the Electoral College. Consider 1960, when Louisiana segregationists came close to replacing Democratic electors with ones who wouldn't support Kennedy (11). Also along those lines, electors are bound by nothing but obligation to vote for the candidate of their party, and sometimes change their decision upon voting. Even if it only happens occassionally, it is yet another fault in this system. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d07f550ac990,2EA7BBA9340E,"Not only is the Electoral College irrational, it is also simply unfair. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+51833d4056e2,2EA7BBA9340E,"Each state can only cast a single vote, so the one representative in Wyoming, who represents only 500 thousand, would have as much say as California's 55 representatives, who represent 35 million voters (12). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43383797360d,2EA7BBA9340E,Other sources say a tie would be unlikely. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c18b110eaed5,2EA7BBA9340E,"However, in 1979 in Ohio, it would have only taken a few thousand voters to vote the other way (12). ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a9bf2e0b8b56,2EA7BBA9340E,"Because of the ""winner-take-all"" system, certain states are left untouched by candidates who know they won't win them. In 2000, certain states didn't even see the candidates, and didn't air campaign ads, denying voters of a chance to further favor or unfavor them (13). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+66eb2cafcecc,2EA7BBA9340E,"It is simple, the Electoral College system is a turn-off for many voters, especially after the incident in 2000 when Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the electoral vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+046859f1f52a,2EA7BBA9340E,"Voters can be discouraged if they have no hope of carrying their state, like Democrats in Texas, or Republicans in Cali (23). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+25661c0dd8f5,2EA7BBA9340E,"Assuming that ""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election (23)"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bfe226b02422,2EA7BBA9340E,"is rather incorrect. Single votes could absolutely sway an election, as mentioned earlier. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b1cd0308d8be,2EA7BBA9340E,"Relying on the popular vote may make a tie more likely, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8e36a8de8470,2EA7BBA9340E,"but it would free voters from an obselete and untrustworthy system. Over 60 percent of voters oppose the Electoral College (9) which is enough to bring attention to these facts and, hopefully, address them before another controversial occurance. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+747104d5c59c,2EA7BBA9340E,"The evidence is all layed out, mishaps and near-mishaps, an impending catastrophe all too possible for comfort, unfair to potential voters. The Electoral College doesn't deserve its defenders. 2000 proved it, the voters have spoken up, and it is indisputably irrational to continue to rely on it. The system has been around for a while, and it will stay in place for the next few years, most likely. However, because of the light now being shined on its faults, it could have a chance to be reformed for the better.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b145d67a001c,2EB12DA322F4,I believe that allowing student to bring phones to school and using them during lunch period and free time but as long as the phones are off during class time is a bad idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2a3a0c51e86,2EB12DA322F4,"because what if the student don't listen to the policy and they have there phones out during classes and there texting during there class and when the teacher ask what is the answer to ""2836/847 they don't the answer how they be able to learn. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c61820ddafe,2EB12DA322F4,"Here's an example I think I can bring my phone to school and text, call, go on the internet go on facebook do what ever i want do and if it goes to far. That student will start to fail school and not doing the homework. That student will start going to classes. Then start skip school her so cool and popular. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+004b27a5f1ff,2EB12DA322F4,I also believe don't allow student to have phone at school at all is another bad idea because what if student needs to call home call someone else what if a group of student are walking to school and someone got shot ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5c1c2b90fa10,2EB12DA322F4,how would they call the police if there phones are at home that student will be dyeing right before the other students eye what would you do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6aa42c05e92,2EB12DA322F4,"So here's policy 3 the student are allow to bring they phones to school but at all time it has to be turned off and in your locker inside your book bag. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+08cf4155f684,2ECCE525D35D,I think that student have a b average. I believe that they should have a C or B average to play sports ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ef9411c86e03,2ECCE525D35D,if the student goes out for a team with one point off from a B average and the have a C average then they might be hurt. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a58aac387bc,2ECCE525D35D,"With a B average they are doing good but no disrespect a C average isn't failing so why not make it that as well.
+
+Now if the kid had a D average they should be taken off the team they are on so they can pull it up and not get low grades again. Most kid think that if they had again in the middle of school the have an excuse to not do their home work but that their fault. With a C average kids can work hard so they don't drop down to a D. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36cf61288cd3,2ECCE525D35D,Another reason that you should make it a C average is so the team at the school wont get dropped from any events. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87bfd2984bbf,2ECCE525D35D,With most of the kid with C' s the school may not have any events for kids to try out for. With that the coach might not have time to try out the kids for the team. some coaches might not even let the kid try out. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84963a0674c0,2ECCE525D35D,So i ask you in the nicest way i can please let the kids play sports and get involved in other actives with a C average. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7d0383560cae,2EDC00346850,"Sports are a very important factor to many schools.
+
+Many kids take sports for granted, and don't focus on their school work.
+
+Our Principal is considering changing school policy so that students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+28f4cefc47b1,2EDC00346850,I fully agree and support this idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a66d1ae5e20d,2EDC00346850,"Despite the fact that many students have a grade C or below average, this new policy would encourage students to do well in school so that they can participate in sports, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+49b3947b0468,2EDC00346850,more students in the school would have grades of B's and even A's ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9f998f8aefeb,2EDC00346850,"the sports teams and activities would be smarter and more successful as a result. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+53c8186db70d,2EDC00346850,"Overall, a requirement of a B average to play sports would be beneficial to our school's community as a whole. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+afc5c00b8537,2EDC00346850,"For example, many of the athletes with averages below B would have a reason to bring their grade up, or else they won't be able to participate in the activity that they love.
+
+All of the athletes would change their priorities so that school comes first.
+
+This rule would encourage students to do better in school so that they can participate in the activities that they love.
+
+They would have a goal of achieving a B average, and applying themselves to achieve that goal. Overall, a requirement of a B average to participate in sports and other activities would be logical to put into play because it encourages students to do well in school and bring their grades up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc1bcf9ee328,2EDC00346850,"With a requirement of a B average to participate in extracurricular activities, more students would have the goal of achieving a B average.
+
+As a result, less students would be failing their courses do to lack of effort or time.
+
+With more students with a higher average, the school would look better in terms of grades.
+
+Now that their is a requirement of a B average to participate in sports, music, or another activity, the school would have much smarter students.
+
+As a result, these students would be sent to better colleges.
+
+This would make the school less known for its bad things, but more well-known for its high academic prestige.
+
+This requirement would be the most reasonable choice because less students would be failing courses. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0bc33627358,2EDC00346850,"For example, the smarter students that earn a B average or even higher would use the knowledge that they learned in the classroom and apply it onto the field.
+
+Instead of having sports teams that consisted of students who didn't make the right decisions and were failing out of their courses, the teams would consist of smart students who applied themselves to reach their goal of earning at least a B average in academics.
+
+On the field, court, or rink, the sports team would be making much smarter plays, and ultimately becoming more successful. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c77f0c32055,2EDC00346850,"The time has come to decide whether or not to make a requirement of a B average amongst students in order to participate in sports or other activities.
+
+This requirement would be beneficial to our school's community because it would encourage students to do well in the classroom, more students would have a B or higher grade average, and the sports teams would be much smarter and more successful as a result.
+
+So, Mr. Principal, go and make a requirement of a B or higher grade average in order to participate in sports or other activities! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c599751cc982,2EEA9454E26C,Yes i think it fair to say that because i think every student can make a B or a C to play any kind of sports that they want to play ,Position,Adequate,,,
+49448786c9fa,2EEA9454E26C,because if you have like a F or D you shouldn't beable to play you shouldn't beable to to play that game or something because it not fair to everyone that they cant play an the game but it is fair to the people who get F&D because they shouldn't be making bad grades they should be making good grades if they want to play an that sport it has nothing to do with ever body just you an principal an teacher why you get the grades you get maybe because it the way you acted an the way you play aronud..... And maybe the kids that want to play a sport cant play because of the way they behavior is or the way they talk to grew people... ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+20120ba7bf67,2EF823A45135,"There are millions of wrecks in the U.S. every year, some due to their own cars not being very reliable. Cars and their manufacurers must be very reliable when it comes to bringing up new models of vehicles. Imagine if you could cut the number of car wrecks in half. Technology is fast pacing and is advancing every day. What if we could have driverless cars, cars that could not only make the world a better place, but also prove how amazing our technology is. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ed04bf460b73,2EF823A45135,"Driverless cars are the next, new future. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a5069d2e4891,2EF823A45135,"Driverless cars have an abundant amount of pros and maybe a little bit of cons, but overall these cars can do great things. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0358196d51f9,2EF823A45135,"A driverless car could possibly stop different aspects of accidents happening. They could even get someone where they need to go. These cars can also help people who barely passed their driver's tests. The car could perform even the most basic stuff, such as, driving through the city, making turns, driving the steering wheel itself, and watching for dangerous things a new or inexperienced driver could not do. Being a new driver can be very challening at first and may even bring a traumatic experience. Coming off as a new driver and only having my license for three months, I know what the pressure can feel like when you feel like you havent learned soemthing and you are already on your own. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+271f6f4a8aa7,2EF823A45135,There are some cons when it comes to new driverless cars, ,Claim,Effective,,
+716dbb6e3dd8,2EF823A45135,"Let's say someone is in a wreck and later come to find the car had failed them, who is responsible now? The manufacturer. The car could fail out of nowhere with no warning signs and even cost someone their life. Though there have been studies, a driverless car could have a potential downfall affect on drivers. Some could feel like they can be lazy and not have to worry about their surroundings and cause an accident that way; A person could even fall asleep at the wheel and do more damage than good. Some states make it illegal to even drive computer-type cars because of a law they have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+789196a9df6f,2EF823A45135,"Driverless cars come with baggage on both sides of good and bad, but with a little more knowledge and research it could change someone's opinion overtime. They could potentially save someone's life and other people surrounding them. They could save a new driver's life and could even help them learn all of the skills of the road. With the new techonology we have in this new future, we could cut the wreck numbers in half to seventy five percent. Driverless cars are not a bad idea and they could possibly save this world. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+236b60a8e394,2F19735DD6EC,Do you want to hear a story? so i was at work cause im a scientist an me in my friend had an agrument about what happen to mars about the facemark. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+db829cf481ee,2F19735DD6EC,he said that a alien put it there i said impossible. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+23bc7e02e48b,2F19735DD6EC,he said the picture look like alien heads. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8a83970d02ef,2F19735DD6EC,the reason why i dont belive aliens are real beacuse i never heard one i never saw one with my own eyes and i also said the face dont look nothing like a alien. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0db7f2956de9,2F19735DD6EC,"Last, we came together an said we dont know ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6229490e4fc7,2F2A39B3108A,"Some countryes do not have the right for vote for who they whant to be president, and the candidate who gets to be the president takes the freedom and security of any person who oppose to him. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e5d18a87edbb,2F2A39B3108A,"It is not fair that something like that could star to thake place in the United States. This country is for the ones that are looking for freedom to have the right to argue their way of thinkind and express, in a good way. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6f75855bc242,2F2A39B3108A,"We have the right to know the candidate's potential, knowledge, way of thinking, how he will governate the United States, hir goal for this country, his expectatives, and if he is able to be a leader. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a7969fc54f20,2F2A39B3108A,"Because if we do not have the right to vote, our way of thinking and our rights is not important. The country depends on the persons who live in there, too. There has to be an agreeement  between the citizens, because there has to be a leader who can be able to defend the country and citizens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b443dcafee9,2F2A39B3108A,"The Electoral Collage does not has a democratic method of selectiong a president, and if there is a tie in electoral vote, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives , where state delegations vote on the president and the Senate would choose the vide-president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e49f90d2357,2F2A39B3108A,"The Electoral Collage is unfair to voters, outdated, and irrational. The disaster factor was the biggest election crisis, and considerinf that the state legislatures are are responsable for picking the electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da09b76df7c7,2F2A39B3108A,"The Electoral Collage method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.
+
+The people needs that the president can have the potential to carry the state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+418ce9ee8e6e,2F3B801D2C6E,You should keep the electoral colleges because people are not only voting for president but are also voting for a slate of electors ,Position,Adequate,,,
+875bb8fd8c64,2F3B801D2C6E,Keep the electors colleges could help the president in the running because the more votes the electors have for that presdient the higher chance he/she will have to win. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10867a81f81d,2F3B801D2C6E,"In the article it says that
+
+""The electoral college requries a presidential canidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president""
+
+.  the winner take all methid means that who ever wins the elction they become president and they also have a winner to become  State Senator. The president has to become sworn in befor he actually starts the job. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93006e3643a3,2F3B801D2C6E,I think that electoral college is fair how are they going to get votes if no one will vote that is why i suggest keeping the electoral colleges open and keep them running ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59df09b976d0,2F3B801D2C6E,"Lets say for example that Barack Obama would not have one without the electoral colleges votes because everyone wanted the president on the running to win so then Barack Obama won the election twice becasue electoral college votes. People say that electoral colleges are good but they are look at our president now he twice in a row because o felectoral college votes. Thans to electoral college votes MR. Barack Obma has now president two times and he is hoping to get president three times. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ca0dd4c3dc5,2F3B801D2C6E,"
+The electoral colleges are very important to people and those people want the electoral colleges to stay open and the do not want them to shut down or get taken/knock down. The electoral colleges acctually make voting fun for people and then more people will want to come when they start hearing about it. The longer you keep them open the higher the votes will be and the voting process will be busy because their is so many people there ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+45dede65c5eb,2F3B801D2C6E,"In the article it says that ""The electoral college is a process, not a place and that the founding fathers were the ones to establish it in the constituion as a compromise between the election of the president by a vote in congress"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80242c993953,2F3B801D2C6E,The electoral college consists of 538 electors but the majority is around 270 electoral votes. Each candidate has his or her own group of electors while they are in the running for president in our state. The one with the mos electoral votes win the running and becomes president for Four years until the next running ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+389d53b0202f,2F3B801D2C6E,The electoral college votes will help the people in the running to become president.             ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+69b7ea1b2cc5,2F5D1019C0DC,"The Electoral College is a process put into place by the founding fathers for the purpose of electing a president. However, this process was enacted at the very beginning of the United States and the question must be asked, Is it still neccessary? Or even fair? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8eb64d9343e4,2F5D1019C0DC,"With advancing technology and better processes, the old ways of doing things must be questioned. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+df206afde107,2F5D1019C0DC,"Almost all states have a winner-take-all system in place, with the exception of Maine and Nebraska. This system has many faults and in some cases can produce false results. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1e0096cedda8,2F5D1019C0DC,"A presidential candidate that wins by a large majority in a state will win the electoral votes of that state, however, if another candidate wins a very close election, he/she will also win a state. For example, in the 2000 presidential election between Al Gore and President Bush, Al Gore won the popular vote of the people but lost the election for president because of the electoral college, the very fact that we know what the popular vote was is proof of neccesity of change. Not only this, but sixty percent of voters want to vote directly. This makes it possible for a candidate to have more individual votes but less electoral votes, making the system somewhat corrupt. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43c367e55c68,2F5D1019C0DC,"Not only is the process of the Electoral College unfair, it is simply not neccessary, with most voters using digital machines to enter their vote for candidate, votes can be counted digitally and accurately. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+83912af6c22a,2F5D1019C0DC,"The electoral college was a great idea before computers were invented and all votes had to be counted by hand. When the process of the Electoral College was put into place, it would have been impossible to count he votes of the entire country with any degree of accuracy, and even if it was possible, the validity of votes would be constantly be questioned. But in this day and age technology makes the very idea of the elctoral college obsolete. I understand the desire for preserving traditional methods but not when it sacrifices a fast, fair, easy system. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+65080628438d,2F5D1019C0DC,"Not only should we use a system using computers to count votes, but we already do, news broadcasters show which presidential candidate is winning in real time using modern technology. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ed26a567b79d,2F5D1019C0DC,"This allows us to know which candidate has won the election on voting day. Keep in mind that when the electoral college was made, many citizens had no idea who had won often until the next year. The fact that we know immediatly is proof that the meeting of the Electoral college in December is completely unnessessary. And what if there is a tie in the elctoral vote, although we know what the popular vote is, we would still have to send the vote to congress. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4fb4a6616a04,2F5D1019C0DC,"Times have changed. Technology has improved. With this the very building blocks of our government must be improved and updated. The Electoral College is a perfect example of a system that worked well in the early days of the country but has since been made obsolete, this system must be fixed ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6c3b46634044,2F5E6E85679A,"The Untied states of america have some of the most interesting history in the world from their food,people to the govrnment. They have a system of govrnment called a representative democery in this system they elect people to represent your groups need and want,but the thing that makes them intereseting isn't the way they run their country it is the way that they elect their representatives. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+86f48e6f181f,2F5E6E85679A,"They use what is called The electoral college to elect their leader this system has it's problems, for an example the people aren't voting for who will be their leader other wise know as the president,but for the people who will vote for the president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6ff426757bc6,2F5E6E85679A,Even though this system has it's down side it also helps them in a lot of ways. this stops you form having a popular vote meaning more then just two parties can send their rep. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+aecb4eedda3c,2F5E6E85679A,"Do you know the saying if it is not broken don't fix it well the Electoral college is that system america has use this system for so long and they aren't the type of people for change that fast, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ab542b0d3c9c,2F5E6E85679A,farther more the Electoral college is only used for the president compare the two system by looking at their other branchs their all doing pretty bad right now. Thats why if it ain't broke don't fix it.    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb1e1833f520,2F7B32094BCD,This letter is to inform you of the idea of requiring students to perform community service. Community service is a good was to show others how our school wants to help out in our community. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f9ecd7b299cd,2F7B32094BCD,This can be fun ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1cc9ff0c1b79,2F7B32094BCD,educational ,Claim,Effective,,,
+15e619fdaf22,2F7B32094BCD,"a great way to have community service hours for the future, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8dc617ac6123,2F7B32094BCD,"a great way to give people an idea of how SCHOOL_NAME is a great school, and a way to teach and inspire others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bbd7c1cf9fb9,2F7B32094BCD,"Students can have fun with their friends while doing something for others. It is also a great opportunity for us students to make new friends, or grow closer to our old friends. This would also be a good opportunity for us students, the faculty and the teachers to grow closer as a family. If ICS were to help out at a soup kitchen, it would be fun for all of us to work together and cook, clean, and make others happy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f077f0617721,2F7B32094BCD,"While doing community service hours, students can learn how to do things that they didn't know how to do before for example; cleaning up litter at a local playground and at our church. This would give students a chance to learn about the environment and be more aware of the planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8959c48e130f,2F7B32094BCD,"Service hours are very helpful in the future. For example high schools, and colleges look at your community service hours and there is a greater percentage that you may get in that school. If they know that you are helpful to others, they would know that you would be helpful in their school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0d14445024d5,2F7B32094BCD,"If people see that SCHOOL_NAME students are helpful, and aware of the planet we live in, they would consider putting there child in our school. Not only would it make people consider this, but it would also leave a good reputation on our school and how it is run. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+235f9677b00a,2F7B32094BCD,Community service is a great way to teach and inspire others ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f105d0bf6007,2F7B32094BCD,"If somebody sees you in the street cleaning, they may be inspired to do the same. Also, you can teach and tutor younger children and give them more knowledge. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c4537e30f04,2F7B32094BCD,"community service is good for the students, the faculty, and the school. It would help us, while helping other. It is fun and even educational. Community service would be a great way to show people how SCHOOL_NAME is a great school, and inspire other schools to do the same. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bac8da1f23d6,2F9499C7A36E,"I believe that Driverless cars are going to be a very important nessesity to the development and transition of transportaion technology. Transportation will change from getting to places by using your own brain, to getting to places without having to really think about what you are doing while you are going somewhere. ",Position,Effective,,,
+70601220e6d6,2F9499C7A36E,"I feel that diverless cars will not only help with safety of people while they are on the road, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+44d02e6ae799,2F9499C7A36E,benifit people by being able to get to places faster ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8417855f3427,2F9499C7A36E,get more things done in the day while driving to a destination. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5bae91338e01,2F9499C7A36E,driverless cars will be the safest way to travel from place to place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7293082d10a,2F9499C7A36E,"This is becuase of all of the safety features that are equipted in driverless cars.
+
+They contain a numerous amount of sensors and alert systems. If there was something that would harm you while in the driverless car, the car would either be able to get out of the situation more effectively than an experienced driver, or would be able to alert the driver to take over and the driver would manually get out of the situation.
+
+In the passage it says that the Google driverless cars contain many sensors. Some of those sensors include, the sensor on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.
+
+This shows first hand how safe the driverless cars are. The Driverless cars have so many built in sensors that even the most dangerous situation can be avoided while in a driverless car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3acd76c14959,2F9499C7A36E,"if everyone owns or uses a driverless car to get to the places it needs to go, then the car can program itself to get to the place that it needs to go as efficiently and in the best route possible. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7c2d44053cd0,2F9499C7A36E,"This is so that the passengers and driver can get to the destination as quickly as possible.
+
+At some point, if the only cars that are used are driverless cars, and laws in all states, not just California, Nevada, Florida, and Washington D.C. have caught up with the driverless cars , then the cars will be able to move quicker and safer to the destinations that are programed into the car.
+
+The more driverless cars on the road, the faster the destination can be acheived. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d615d36e8b3,2F9499C7A36E,"if you use a driverless car to go to the places you need to go to in the day, you will be able to get a multitude of things done that you were not able to get done before. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+08e395a7b38a,2F9499C7A36E,"
+Car companies like BMV are trying to come up with things that they can add to the car to have things to do while driving to a specific location.
+
+If you have emails that need to be sent or a presentation that needs to be made, you can easily accomplish thoses tasks while ""driving"" the driverless car.
+
+If at any point in time the car will give you a notification that you need to take over driving for a period of time, then all you have to do is stop your work for a short period of time to manually drive the car.
+
+After that then you can get back to what you were working on before. This will allow you to get more things done in the day that were not possible before. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ece77be1d01f,2F9499C7A36E,", I think that driverless cars are the milestone of the future, and that they are going to help to expand the horizons of multitasking, stafety, and speed to destinations.
+
+Driverless cars are the gateway to the future and will really help the world as a whole to keep moving and to bring more great things like the driverless car in the future. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+55e51b88b23b,2F9C2FCB6880,"I think that students should be do community serves, but not too much only. probably only like one hour or tow. ",Position,Effective,,,
+6f63ebca5d14,2F9C2FCB6880,Because sum individuals might have things too take care of. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0bfb63be7378,2F9C2FCB6880,"some might need to take care of a sick relative or a little sister or little brother because there parents cud be at work or a meting and stuff like that.
+
+Or maybe that a few students were out sick and out of school for a rely long time and do not have time to do community serves because there caching up on there school work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64f053d0ac4b,2F9C2FCB6880,we can even make going too tutorials a community serves ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+184a71dc52ec,2F9C2FCB6880,I did that when i went to court when i was out for so may days. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+77d7cd9b4ef2,2F9C2FCB6880,"We can even start a ""cleaning the school club ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdbbb8165e5e,2F9C2FCB6880,"Were students clean around the school and get community serves time. Or helping a teacher during, before like set up tables and other things like that, and after school by cleaning the class room or if its a science teacher you can help clean up after a lab has been completed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5611a9ea94d,2FA703D6B89C,"The Electoral College has been around since the Constitution was established by the founding fathers. The question is, Is it time for it to go? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+44f3010aa992,2FA703D6B89C,"I believe that the Electoral College should be kept, ",Position,Effective,,,
+36a5552411b4,2FA703D6B89C,changing the election by popular vote would not be wiser ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6dd5a68c06b2,2FA703D6B89C,"the Electoral College is fair for the people. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+dde8a860edd8,2FA703D6B89C,"Source 3 states, ""In 2012's election... Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the  electoral vote compared to only 51.3% of the popular votes cast for him and Romney."" This source is arguing against the Electoral college, meaning they're trying to make a point on why it's not fair that Obama won with his 61.7 percent. The people vote for their electoral college, for their state. If the electoral college's votes are higher than the popular votes that means that the college is doing their job correctly. Source 3 also states, ""... Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral- vote victory in that state."" This statement means that even if the popular and electoral votes are both high, the electoral vote wins, because majority rules. Just because the person running for office is popular, doesnt mean they should necessarily win. Electoral votes basically come from the people, and if the ""people"" choose a certain candidate, then that's who should win. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a9c8145cfc58,2FA703D6B89C,The Electoral College is fair to everyone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bebd4fd80330,2FA703D6B89C,"Source 2 states, ""Under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" This method of choosing the president is completely and totally fair to the people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+da1328d2c8c4,2FA703D6B89C,"No, they're not directly choosing who the president is ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bbeb610f261a,2FA703D6B89C,"but they have people to do it for them. As long as they cast in the right vote for the party that that candidate represents, then the Electoral college board should be filled with all the right people. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+eaf0509a6987,2FA703D6B89C,"Yes there is a possibility that the candidate someone votes for may not make it on the Electoral college board, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+39b507e1f7b6,2FA703D6B89C,"but if the majority of the people are represnted, then that's all that matters. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+97f3208ef266,2FA703D6B89C,"Source 3 states, ""...each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that truth is barely betrayed)... however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote."" For instance, if the people vote for candidates for the electoral college, and the majority of them are not what the majority of the people wanted, or they lied about being pledged to a candidate for president, then there is still a chance that the candidate that the people did want could be elected, by the national popular vote. Also, the people that are against the electoral college shouldn't be, because the electoral college is not definite. Just because the electoral colleg votes for a certain candidate, does not guarantee that the overall national vote will be that person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9697a95a8ee7,2FA703D6B89C,"Eventhough some people think that the electoral college, should be no more, I strongly disagree, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+291032657b0e,2FA703D6B89C,"because the college is fair to the people -because they represent the people- and the college is a smart idea. The college works in everyone's favor. For those that disagree, there is always a strong chance that the candidate represented by the elctoral college will not win presidency. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b4af36de8c3c,2FA703D6B89C,"In conclusion, the Electoral college is beneficial to the people and a wise idea. The people in the entire country are never going to unanimously agree on anything. Keeping the Electoral college is not only wise, but a safe way to ensure that voting doesn't go wrong, and that the people  always get a fair say in government matters.                       ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e50c7b737cd4,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"Students are put into many different situations during their learning career. Many of these problems hinder their ability to obtain a proper student experience of learning. However, with the advancements we make with our technology, it appears that students can now have more opportunities to learn in a comfortable manner. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f4aa07148e0f,2FC6AA5BBAE9,Online school is an innovative idea that makes it easier for students of all backgrounds and situations to learn with their peers without missing a beat ,Position,Effective,,,
+ad48235b63c6,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"I believe with this option, it would support those who are ill and cannot physically go to school ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fe9fee3ea28f,2FC6AA5BBAE9,it would give those who have moved to a foreign country an opportunity to learn in their own language ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c85ee90fe865,2FC6AA5BBAE9,and it would put our educational technology to good use. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3021a0801d2c,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"It is a very stressful situation for those students that have fallen ill to catch up to their peers. Missing out on a proper education due to something that could not be controlled is a very stressful situation in it of itself. There are parents that force their kids to go to school despite being sick, putting other students at risk of illness and not giving the sick student a proper learning experience. It gets even worse for those unfortunately inflicted with terminal illness, who must miss school for long periods at a time ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+08f5be2dba57,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"However, parents would not have to worry about bringing their sick child to school, because school could bring itself to their sick child through a more flexible method of learning online. This could potentially help eliminate the problem of diseases spreading at schools that offer this option, and making it easier for students to learn despite their ill state. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8ee9d13ef5b0,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"Many students move to different places throughout their learning career, making it difficult for them to adapt to their new situations. It is tiresome for many to adjust to new circumstances that could vary drastically depending on where the move takes place. For instance, students that have parents in the military may face moving to different countries in their adolescence. It could also be very difficult for students that move internationally to understand the language or cultural differences that they are surrounded by ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f27754540af5,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"With online schooling and video conferencing, students will be able to be educated despite the hundreds of miles between them and their original school. This option may even help students take baby steps to slowly adjust to their new environment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2e5c8d150488,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"Science and technology are a constant effort that help us with our daily tasks, but, for some odd reason, we do not seem to utilize the extent of our genius when it comes to education ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c0eeb64a070d,2FC6AA5BBAE9,Online schooling is an affordable alternative to the concept of formal education. Some could argue that online schooling is only the beginning of a future with extremely accessible class education ,Claim,Effective,,,
+047d69d36000,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"We could see the implementation of virtual reality, or other new technology, in schooling systems in the near future. The more we encourage the use of this technology, the more we will see students prosper with a fulfilling education. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ee74a6cb2f9e,2FC6AA5BBAE9,"With our recent innovations, we will be able to see the next generations of students achieve a better education that gets increasingly accessible with the passage of time. It is becoming clear that the problem of missing education based off of things that students cannot control must be taken more seriously. Countless students are faced with circumstances that change every aspect of their learning experience, but we are now more able to counter these challenges than ever before. Despite the fact we have a long way to go to make sure students are given a perfect learning experience, problems associated with illness and moving could definitely be assisted with. Advancements in educational technologies will only occur with an abundant amount of care for the generations to come. Online schooling is a peek into our progressive education future. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e1959f0ea97,2FDB1B6086C9,I believe that policy 1 is a great idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9c99201a8f00,2FDB1B6086C9,most students sometimes get done with their work before others and sometimes they just have to sit there. By this I mean maybe it would be a good idea if we were allowed to have our phones with us. If this is possible we should keep them off during classes and other educational things we attend while we are at school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2531b0e1dc2d,2FDB1B6086C9,I think it would be a good idea if we could at least have our phones during free time or when we are done with all of our work as long as we don't bother others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdda33f731f3,2FDB1B6086C9,It is also a good idea to have our phones with us in case there is some type of emergency while we are at school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e3b01205b04,2FDB1B6086C9,"maybe the power gets shut off or something. The reason i like this policy is because when we are all done with our work, going on field trips, or even just having free time we should be able to have them at least to text the people at our school or maybe if possible people at other schools as long as they are not texting while in class. They could wait until they are finished with all of their work and then text back when they're done ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2627edf49253,2FDB1B6086C9,I also think we should have them at our lunch period too. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0465339bd34d,2FDB1B6086C9,I think this because maybe when we are old enough to drive or maybe our siblings or parents could pick us up to go out to lunch every once in a while as well. I really think we should not have our phones on at all or out when we are having a test because someone could text someone the answer to a question or maybe if the had a camera phone they could take a picture of their test and send it to them and that would get you in a lot of trouble ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fd3c534ac158,2FDB1B6086C9,"Mainly i think we should only have them out in our free time, when we are going on trips, when you have showed the teacher that you're done with your work, and at lunch. If you will can you please try to take this into consideration and just think about it and get back with me. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+367f0a91222a,2FE74FFEB8A3,"Hello, I am writing to you about the Electoral College and why that I think it should be removed ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4095a6e51279,2FE74FFEB8A3,Why I think we should remove the Electoral College is when voter selects the president they want they are really just picking for a elector who elects the president for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d457a9a942a7,2FE74FFEB8A3,"Also this makes a single rep from Wyoming of 500,00 people has as much say as 55 reps for California who represents 35 million people ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6ae194e4f52,2FE74FFEB8A3,"The last reason behind this is also being unfair to voters, the winner take all system where in the state the winner of the votes gets them all. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8335af7f9c00,2FE74FFEB8A3,"So in effect a candidate would spend no time in that per say a swing state. which the may have a chance of winning. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+88aa389a214d,2FE74FFEB8A3,"When you vote for the president you really are not voting for him, you're voting for a elector who really elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0f46672f3a9,2FE74FFEB8A3,"Also the question is brought up, who picks the electors? This also depends on the state could be the state party's central committee or the presidential candidate's people do. Also another question is what controls the elector from electing the wrong candidate, nothing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5420c73d213d,2FE74FFEB8A3,"Also why does a single reps in Wyoming with 500,00 people have as much say as 55 reps in California with 35 million people? That is just unfair to the voters, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7154df52c1df,2FE74FFEB8A3,how could that in anyway represent what the majority of the people want. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cce2f8fcd95f,2FE74FFEB8A3,The other way the electoral collage is unfair is the winner take all system I mentioned earlie ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c16c0ffb228,2FE74FFEB8A3,"with majority votes in a state is the state vote, such as if 46 percent of people in a state voted one candidate and 54 for the other insted of just giving the candidates their votes the majority decided one would have them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d36aa5e35dcc,2FE74FFEB8A3,The Electoral College is also not a democratic system of voting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d49e69a538b5,2FE74FFEB8A3,"people are really not deciding, and when it is said you are allowing each party to pick a trusted slate of nominees it is not true because the state's central committee not the presidential candidate's reps who are the people really needed to vote for such. In 2000 Gore had more popular votes than bush but less electoral votes, though rare to happen this the president who runs the country for four years at a time so that one rare moment could mean the future of the U.S.A . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8092ce6e109,2FE74FFEB8A3,"Also a president does not need to be trans-regional, they only need to appeal to swing states and not ruin relations with their states. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a9a1e2fc012,2FE74FFEB8A3,"So that was and is my reasoning of why I think that the Electoral College should be removed from our political system. Between the being unfair to voters through voting for electors not even the president, reps not even being scaled right also the winner take all system making the system unbalanced, and the presidential candidates not even needing to appeal to most states just the swing states. I hope this passage convinces you that the Electoral College should be removed in place of a better system that is not out dated.                    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+54c4cbdf93ee,30045307DB37,I am writing to you about the debate on the abolishment of the Electoral College ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+314fd310b102,30045307DB37,I see absolutely no point in the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6059d874609d,30045307DB37,all it is is elected people from a state voting on the president based on what the popular vote for the president was in their assigned area. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b2ce6317d5c,30045307DB37,"The Electoral College has 538 electors. The majority of them are from the states of California, Texas, New York, and Florida. Election Day is held on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. I don't see why we need other people to vote for us. The Bill of Rights said that we have a ""freedom of speech"", but our ""freedom of speech"" is given to other people to change around. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbde29ec247d,30045307DB37,We need to abolish the Electoral Congress so we can just vote for who we want! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09dbf1a2b514,30045307DB37,"The popular vote means that the president who recieved more votes claims that the state voted more for him/her. The popular vote goes to our ""electors"" and they decide to vote for the President. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+93d3f2bf72a4,30045307DB37,"We should just vote straight up because the election in 2008 was a huge mistake. Obama decides to do whatever he wants. Insurance prices have gone up due to ""ObamaCare"", and now there is a huge, long, and exhausting process to get te see a specialist especially if you need to see one. It is out of control and he needs to do something about it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+32cb4dd4fee9,30045307DB37,We should abolish the Electoral College because its just a waste. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5aa54c3a45dd,30045307DB37,"All they do is tally up the popular vote, and say ""OK, im going to vote for Romney since that's what my people want.""  Why can't we just vote for who we want instead of wasting our time! The popular vote should be the only way to vote. There shouldn't be a long and hard process to voting. If I go and vote, I don't want to have to know like 60 different people to vote for, I just want to check the box saying that I want to vote for 'so and so' and leave and go home. It is ridiculous about having a whole process to voting. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4050e6ee689c,30045307DB37,"I hope this letter made up your mind on to vote
+
+YES
+
+for abolishing the Electoral College. When I get older and can start voting, I hope that I can vote for whom ever I want without being told that "" You just voted for nothing because the popular vote when to '(other Presidential Candidate)'and they won so they get the state.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f389611c75ec,300B76F37D8E,"I don't think it is fair to the students that play sports to have just an B average, i think it should be at least an C average because some students are better in some subjects than other students and by taking that away you are taking away all some kids know ",Position,Effective,,,
+8e344fc34acf,300B76F37D8E,some kids need sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa895d1e8404,300B76F37D8E,some kids try in school but can never get there work done because some don't understand the subjects they are failing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c0771c591f0,300B76F37D8E,"Some kids can't help if all they can make is an C average because some students need more help in some subjects than others, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c036c0e874b7,300B76F37D8E,they may make straight A' s in one class but when they get to another subject they make an C. Some kids get some subjects and others do not. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eafae9e7c65b,300B76F37D8E,some kids enjoy playing there sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+54e9ad615873,300B76F37D8E,i know a kid whose mom made him quit playing basketball because he got one C on his report it tore him because he was really sad going to the games and him not being on the court but he was in the stands watching his team. That's all he live for was basketball. What I'm saying is make the kids take a survey just a little one explaining what they can do to bring there grades up. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b08137e1d7f,300B76F37D8E,"In the end just give the kids another chance to explain why there are making the bad grades and to ask if they need help in anyway, but don't take away there right to play sports. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a023b886930b,301D48946CB9,"Can you really trust a car to take you from point A to point B safely? There are many possible things that can go wrong while a person is not controlling their car. I think that there is not a safe way for a car to drive a person all by itself. If you don't know the next action that your car is going to take, how can you stop anything bad from happening? Will the car be able to determine where to stop if it is approaching a stop sign? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d7f21404d6b2,301D48946CB9,"There are too many ""what ifs"" with a driverless car for me to feel safe to ride in one, or to even have one driving on the street around me. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b847b1771251,301D48946CB9,"To me, there are a variety of things that can go wrong when you are allowing the car drive all by itself. There are too many questions that need to be answerd about these new cars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+73c4eb7bda91,301D48946CB9,"For example, how will the car react to a sudden change in the environment? If another car gets to close will it swerve out of the way potentionally causing an accident? Even if the car notifies the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, what will happen if the driver isn't notified in time? Also, if one of the sensors on the car were to be broken or damaged, then how could the car continue to drive on its own? Would it notify the driver that a new part is needed? If the car were to get into an accident, who would be to blame, the driver or the company that created the car? Would it depend if it was on manual control or automatic? These questions are the main reasons why the driverless cars need to be improved before I will even think about ridding in one. I know that I would rather know exactly what I am doing and how it will be done instead of having a car try to do it for me. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29dccef07e30,301D48946CB9,"
+I think that driverless cars are a terrible idea. There are too many problems that can occur during the driving process, and I don't want my life in the hands of a car that can't see or think the way that a human does ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e908b5a44e36,301D48946CB9,"If during some parts of the drive it requires a human to take the wheel, why have it automatically drive you? Wouldn't it get tiring waiting for your turn to drive, especially when you aren't sure when the car is going to have you take over? You must stay focused on the road and have both hands on the wheel, so you could very easliy just drive the car yourself without the worry. This way you can control the situations that you get into, and not having a car get you into trouble that you might not be able to get out of. I think that it is much more safe to have a human that can respond quickly to change and can manuver through obsticals than to have a car, that might not see everything in its environment, drive automatically through it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e6981124214a,30293E16144E,I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2e5e90aa7b93,30293E16144E,Because it's easier to read when voting ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+531db59f298e,30293E16144E,"everything is label right, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bc5a8003f7a9,30293E16144E,"the President has alot of trust in people. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+50ccb3230a44,30293E16144E,"First of all, I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the
+
+United States because it's easier to read when voting ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ffd226450ab7,30293E16144E,"In source one, by the Office of the Federal Register, it states that ""The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President"". This shows that when all the votes are tallyed up theirs no need to go through so much problem, when their's basically a rubric to go over the electors and the electoral votes. For example, if this wasn't invented, we would have our own people just sit their on long day and nights. Without any sleep and count all those votes. This could lead to alot of miscounts. This is why I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the presidnet of the United States. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75662e91a848,30293E16144E,"Furthermore, I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the
+
+United States because everything is label right. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3fc1aadf9858,30293E16144E,"In source one, by the Office of the Federal Register, it states that ""Under the 23rd Amendement of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors. . . ."". This shows that whatever the 23rd Amendment is under, that's what the District of Columbia is allocated. This is just like an case at court or when you getting arrested. For example, when you are pleged guilty for murder. The judge is going to read every amendment you broke and what's your charges. And everything that's she's reading is made up. It's all labeled in United State Constitution. This is why i strongly believe we should keep the Electroal College for the president of the United States. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9528faa6e08e,30293E16144E,"Lastly, I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the
+
+United States because the president has alot of people to trust in ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+37a23d81e0d3,30293E16144E,"In source one, by the Office of the Federal Register it states that ""Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors."" This shows that whoever the president of the United State is choosing for his or her own group of electors has put alot of trust on each and one of that individual. And it's time for the President to see who or who he can't put his trust in. For example, A president has alot of things that we depend on him or her to do for our Country. And the Electoral College is the best way to see if he or she could do it. This is why I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the United States. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d1be8c484c6c,30293E16144E,"In conclusion, I strongly believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the United States because; One, it's easier to read when voting. If the Electoral College didn't existed their would be alot of miscounting. Second, everything is label right. Their's no need to get things from the top of your head. Third, the presdient has aot of in trust in people. Us humans gets to finally see if we could depend on him. If he choose's the right group of electors. This is why I believe we should keep the Electoral College for the president of the United States. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c8670e2adf7c,3030A5BB7889,I would go with policy number one because something might come up that day at school and the student might need to tell a parent what happened. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5bb72a71f912,3030A5BB7889,I wouldn't let the students have the phones all day because that would effect their learning skills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a15bbe102c1,3030A5BB7889,They would become hooked to their phone and not listen to their teacher as much. But I would go ahead and have them use their phones through out the day when they are not in classes. Like say it started snowing really bad at school that day and your coach tells you at school that there will be no practice after school. You could call or text your parent ahead of time during school that there is no practice. So it would be more efficient for you and your parent both. Your parent could go home earlier without having to wait for you after practice. I just think that it is important to have your phone at least when your not in class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1e0427aac46,3030A5BB7889,But sometimes it isn't good to have phones at all in school ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+80582a8bb740,3030A5BB7889,"Like say someone at your school got shot or maybe something very bad happened to someone and your texting and calling your parents, grandparents, friends, and other people about what had happened. Well you and your whole school plus the people your texting and calling all the time. They block the phone station so you cant call the real important people like the hospital or police ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44ce03e3c561,3030A5BB7889,That would be bad so the there are PROS and CONS about having phones at schools. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ca59e9502407,3052DB170D3E,I believe that having time to use our cell phones is prior to our learning. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b3973e732d5e,3052DB170D3E,What if someone's family member is pregnant and goes into labor during class? Would you deprive them of getting updates via text? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec7e68a6e72f,3052DB170D3E,I think if its the right circumstance you should be able to use your phones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3f1412236fc,3052DB170D3E,"Like if your math teacher runs out of calculators and you don't get one, you should be able to use the calculator on your phone. Maybe music calms you down and you have some on your phone and you are too stressed about some personal problem and they cant focus on they're work, this has actually happened to me. One time i had a substitute teacher named TEACHER_NAME, he would let us talk, text, listen to music, and now he's banned from the premises and i can tell you i got more work done in 30 minutes then i could've in a day of that class ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6313cf7eab29,3052DB170D3E,I think if were allowed some leeway than we will be happy with our teachers so we can actually work on our work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c6a122e7706,3052DB170D3E,Some kids are so shy that they don't even talk to their teachers and those kids might think that the class is too hard or the teachers are mean or something if we were allowed phones out in class he might feel comfortable ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ff32cd3e474,3052DB170D3E,I could see where there would be some trouble with kids who simply don't care ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1262d20186c3,3052DB170D3E,so there should be some sort of points system where you have to have a certain amount of points to get the privilege of phones ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+57a768e9196b,3052DB170D3E,What's the point of being at school if you're not comfortable. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7250e94ee557,305B4157DD19,Do you think that we should keep the Electoral College? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b8df885b2fdf,305B4157DD19,We should keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+942dbd4f8570,305B4157DD19,"because the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+23f907b1dc5f,305B4157DD19,"You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state ad shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year. Your state's Certificates of Ascentainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election. Abolishing the electoral college! According to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore,Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,Bob Dole,the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44be18be0f3e,305B4157DD19,"The single best arguement against the Electoral College is what we might call the disaster factor. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. In the same vein, ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e532563acbf,305B4157DD19,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. It's official: The Electoral College is unfair,outdated, and irrational. The best arguements in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguements against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college! The Electoral College is a widely regarded as an anachronism,a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular vots the winner. There are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College. The first reason is certainty of outcome. The second reason is everyone's president. The third reason is swing states. The fourth reason is big states. And the last reason is to avoid run-off elections. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+821629dd36ff,305B4157DD19,"
+It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. But of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and in spite of that, about one-half the eligible American population did vote in election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election [source 3: In defense of the Electoral College: five reasons to keep our dispised method of choosing president]. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+57a10a03b2e6,305B4157DD19,That is why we should keep the Electoral College.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+378e85e76fb0,306BCA39D2E9,"In all honestly, getting rid of the Electoral College is for the best. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e5906c265d51,306BCA39D2E9,It's unfair to the voters. Changing it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States would be easier for the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31caf5a7d005,306BCA39D2E9,"because the candidates don't go to states they don't have a chance of winning, because of the winnner-take-all system. The candidates only focus on the tight races in the swing states. Sorce 2 also claims that in the 2000 election, 17 states didn't see the candidates at all! That's pretty rediculous. And voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't even get to see a single campaign ad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+62a87843b705,306BCA39D2E9,"In the Electoral College system, voters dont only vote for the president, but for electors, who also vote for the president. Then again, in source 2, the article says the the electors that were voted for can vote for anyone they choose. That's some tricky business. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed594ec1d673,306BCA39D2E9,Voters can't control who the electors vote for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23898407776b,306BCA39D2E9,"Electors aren't even voted for by the people. They sometimes come from state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes even the presidential candidates themselves. The second article says that the legislature is responsible for picking the electors. And these electors coukd always go against what the people want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38d4baff805c,306BCA39D2E9,"Article 1 says that to Electoral college is meant to be a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College consists of the meeting of electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05e8f0201f73,306BCA39D2E9,Doing away with the Electoral Cololege is the best thing to do for the people. IT's unfair and tricky. The people deserve to be respected and not cheated out of their vote by electors.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9e35dc0d8960,308E3A168F23,Dear senator i think that you shuled change to people vote then a Electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dd4d54a5fbd4,308E3A168F23,"Here are the reason why you change it is unfair, stuipd. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1598aaf085a,308E3A168F23,these are the reason why we should go to people vote for the president of the USA. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+566e55d0240e,308E3A168F23,"why does a state person can pick are next president. when the people cant choose and the state vote are more powerful then the people. the people can choose the president. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0770da24f7c4,308E3A168F23,"for example Nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percsnt purality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in the Electoral college (301 out 370). These is a reason why people right need to count more the the state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+241b89c78591,308E3A168F23,A nother reason is it is stuiped you can have more people vote then a nother guy can get the state vote it cost more .  ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+701aa81ac9a2,308E3A168F23,"If you can get tmore then 200 and get litten the half you won. if you win the big state that have electoral vote you can win. you can get CAL, texas, and florida you got a lot of vote . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bc8585a8d45,308E3A168F23,These are the reason why you it not faair and stupid. These are the reason why you should not letthe stae vote. You should let the peopel of the USA vote for the president then the state.             ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4d667cb777ff,30935D02377A,Community Service is a very important aspect of life. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7615b28cca82,30935D02377A,"As a firm believer in this, I would ask you to consider that all students of SCHOOL_NAME take part in community service. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0fdf88e01e5a,30935D02377A,"As Christians, we are called to administer to the needs of the poor, but if this school is not pushing for it than how are we fulfilling our duties as Christians?
+
+Whether it's working in soup kitchens downtown or helping babysit a neighbor, we should be striving to answer our call from God. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+55dbfed65043,30935D02377A,"I have done community service with my peers and during my experiences, I have encountered many people from various ages, genders, races, and social classes.
+
+From every trip I have gained a valuable experience. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5669010d86f2,30935D02377A,"During one of my experiences, I was working in a soup kitchen in downtown Cleveland.
+
+Although intimidating at first, I helped by serving those who didn't have the same gifts I am blessed with.
+
+Isn't that what we are called to do? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5d3741e9d52,30935D02377A,"I learned from this that every human person is valuable and should be treated with dignity and respect.
+
+Wouldn't you like all of the students at SCHOOL_NAME to participate in such a great journey of faith and attempt to carry out what we are taught by Jesus Christ? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc4382de4955,30935D02377A,I believe by helping our society to become a better place is why we are put here on this earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a31c1b287c55,30935D02377A,"we shouldn't be wasting our time and talents by selfishly keeping our gifts to ourself.
+
+We are called to share those gifts with others. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1370a305500d,30935D02377A,"Simply, I am asking that you implement at least ten hours of community service for the entire school year. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1681553aafda,30935D02377A,That is only a little over an hour of community service per month. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+599f793435c6,309BE8E1DCF1,I disagree with the idea of only letting students with B grade average or higher only being allowed to participate in schools sports. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+05cf8904269c,309BE8E1DCF1,It is unfair to all the other students that were one point off from a B point average or those who didn't get those A' s or B' s. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fdb4335a6254,309BE8E1DCF1,"It will make all the other students fell left out, or feel like they're being excluded. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c33bfd1c9ef2,309BE8E1DCF1,"""Don't exclude, you should always include."" This is what teachers have told my fellow students and I for years. I think it is unfair to not let everyone compete in sports. These students that didn't get A' s or B' s may be the people who always wanted to compete in sports, but never had thought to join or never had the guts to stand up and join the teams, but if you introduce this new rule, then they don't even get a chance to try. I think this new rule is unfair and it shouldn't be kept. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fd5dd4814486,309BE8E1DCF1,"not everyone is perfect in school, and not everyone gets all A' s and B' s. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+623a17a2374f,309BE8E1DCF1,"One little C could ruin any students chances of competing in school sports and representing their school. I don't think schools should judge kids on their grades by letting the grades decide if a student can participate in sports or not. according to this new rule, a student can have all A' s and one C, but it's not the A' s that matter then, it's that one little C. Don't let this new rule prevent any student from competing in sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91776b8a6879,309BE8E1DCF1,"sports provide any student with what they always need, confidence and exercise. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0e7bc7e787e3,309BE8E1DCF1,"If you let a student's grade decide if a student can or can't compete in sports, you can be holding them back from healthy exercise and keep them from building confidence. Exercise keeps students healthy and when a student competes in sports, they are exercising. Every gym teacher I've ever had has always told us how daily exercise is important and I've seen many commercials that say growing kids and teens need at least one hour of exercise each day to keep physically fit and healthy. Sports also build confidence. When a team wins, it boosts a person's confidence. When you are confident, you feel that you can do anything and succeed. Sports provide healthy exercise and confidence to students, but if you keep this rule, you'll be depriving it from us. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d62f7fca9c9,309BE8E1DCF1,"Do you want to exclude students and make them feel like they're not good enough to participate in sports? Do you want to deprive us from healthy exercise and confidence? Please consider the consequences of keeping this new rule. I feel it is unfair and I strongly disagree with it. I don't want anyone to feel left out or worthless when it comes to sports, but do you? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c1d028199a22,30B3A5EACADC,"In this article it talks about how ''Driveless Cars Are Coming'' to the world soon.
+
+They have been in the world since 2009 but we have never seen them on the road yet because we live in Indiana.
+
+California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have limited self-driving cars.
+
+Manufacturers believe that in the future there will be more of these types of cars and they will help the community significantly. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b429c1817be4,30B3A5EACADC,"In the article it sais that googles Toyota Prius are assisted with ''position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearveiw mirror, four automative radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.'' ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80e2cf2b5fa5,30B3A5EACADC,They fully loaded the car to be very protected at all times but its not like they cant break or just not work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88a5140d73ce,30B3A5EACADC,The driverless car in my opinion should just stay away from the roads ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e9a347bdd421,30B3A5EACADC,"In 2013 they said that they put a ''Traffic Jam Assistant'' on a 2013 BMW.
+
+It can drive its self with the help sometimes of a human touch if in any trouble.
+
+Manufactures sais that they will have a camera in a car and will watch the person as the person watches the road. Manufactures are also bring a system to where if the human needs to drive then they can turn off the system and they can start to drive without it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9bc5c97ee2a9,30B3A5EACADC,I agree with this part because if the car is driving and he human is faling asleep then the cars with cameras will notify them by vibrating the seats and waking the person up. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+69927ce769be,30B3A5EACADC,"The thing i disagree with is the car driving by itself because if that does evolve to regular society, then I think we will have something else to deal with. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c477cfcc3249,30B3A5EACADC,"Have saying this in 2016 it sais that ''Tesla is releasing a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.
+
+Mercedes Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can truly drive themselves by 2020.''
+
+What I think is that it will be far past in the future to where we finally see these cars on the road driving themselves and all we can do is wait till it happenes and see what will happen. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d0053de864e1,30C6A72F5821,I am writting this letter on behaf of my feelings on changing the election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3d5df46c57f3,30C6A72F5821,"The single best argument against the electoral collage is what might be what we (the american people) might call the disastor factor, We should consdier ourselves lucky that in the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a centry; the system can allow much worse. Back in 1960, segregationists in the Lousiana legislature nearly succeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy)
+
+""Faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote, In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representives. Where state deleations vote on the president, and the senate would choose the vice-president. At the most basic level, he electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state.
+
+Canidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winnning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. During the 2000 campain, seventeen sates didnt see the canidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a campain ad. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it... Originally the founding fathers estabished the electoral college in the Constitutuin as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress but i believe that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational! Some of the best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d55d2b9e7f5,312812841AB3,Whats up with the electoral college? Can we really trust it? Ofcourse you cant and all that apose can stand up and walk out the door .The presidental race is a fake!!! So the goverment wants to tell you that you need to be a citezen to vote but what are you voting for? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+3a89e21fdc73,312812841AB3,"The electoral college is a fraud, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ebfebfbd8e66,312812841AB3,"your supposed to send your personal opinion to vote for the president of your country, not some lazy bum that sits in a chair all year and when time comes to put his vote in he overides yours and the peoples votes for you and not even care because they are getting paid to? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2eefe371d657,312812841AB3,It only takes two hundered and seventiy votes from the electoral college to elect the president when theres over two billon residents in the united states? You mean to call this a demcracy when its really a underground dictator ship. I dont know how hard it is to bribe a person in a high postion but it is hard to bribe a whole country ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6960337f5789,312812841AB3,I belive we should get to actually vote for the next presdent ,Claim,Effective,,,
+60e37919fc01,312812841AB3,theres no trust into the peoples belifes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88fe3c130b93,312812841AB3,i mean yes theres alot of bandwagon fans and people who really have no idea of whats going on in their country ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+31215b081783,312812841AB3,but i promise you we wont fool around and compirmise the whole system beliving in our own belifes ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+65cca8289450,312812841AB3,these fancy bosos mignht thuink they know what their doung but they really dont there just a bunch money thisrty pigs and it isnt fair to the people to rely on theb electoeral college to pick the fate of our country as long as we live on it ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d8c4b8e0bfe,312812841AB3,The fact that we cant even pick the electors make it even worse ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+904d592e4287,312812841AB3,i mean how are we even supposed to trust them i dont know who they are do you? how do you know what the legislators a caplble of they could have been bribed and no one would even know i mean the goverment already has alot of secterts and they could be asdding on the them and you wouldnt evem knowwhy beacuse its the goverment there broken up into little pieces of fruadery its incredibly anoyying to know that if you even try t fight about the rights of a cietzen you'll lose not even having to walk into the court room because the goverment runs that too!!! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43f6d1b782e3,312812841AB3,"When I read the title for source two i automaticlly agreed with the incredbly percise source because I have been asking myself the same question ever since i first learned about it in  middle school. Every time i would ask the teacher I would always get the same responce ""thats a good question let me get back to you on that."" I know that its not the teacher because im pretty sure the presidnet cant even ansewr that ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+080115e2e0f5,312812841AB3,Even in source three it dosent answer my question and its the electoral colleges defence ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8be81ffe4cac,312812841AB3,but their defense isnt that strong sorry to tell you that it gives me five reasons but there not strong reasons and I belive source two out battles the both  source one and two. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8092fdee2ccd,312812841AB3,So in conclusion i have stated in almost every pargargh DO NOT TRUST THE SYSTEM!!! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f633b49f4bac,312D8CFDF5DF,We should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+70b6cf55c2d5,312D8CFDF5DF,its a good process and it keeps us from having the problem of elections in which no candidates receives a majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f56164870ac8,312D8CFDF5DF,Like in 1968 with Nixon and in 1992 in Clinton were they only got 43 percent plurality of the popular votes but with the Electoral College which invariably produces a clear winner. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ce158e10a45,312D8CFDF5DF,"The Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no chance of carrying their state Democrats in Texas, an idea of this is like a Republicans in California. The Electoral College needs a presidential candidate to have have trans regional appeal like South,Northeast,etc. With the Elecoral College is un likely than a dispute over the popular vote. It happened in 2000 because that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. A example is in 2012, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and romney. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2eaa6f37c45,312D8CFDF5DF,"The Electoral College is widely regarded as a anachronism, a non demorcratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overpowered by declaring the candidate who get the most popular votes the winner. The advocates of this position are right in debatingthat the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When u vote you're not voting for the presidential u pick yor're actually voting for a slate of electoes. Both party each selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee but that trust is rarely betrayed however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Electoral college is good to stay. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7acc501bf56b,312D8CFDF5DF,"The Electoral College helps with Certainty of outcome, Everyone's president, Swing states,Big staes, Avoid run off elections. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total of numbers of votes are 538 is an even number but it is highly unlikely. The new president will have no regard for their interests,that he really isn't their president. The most thoughtful voters should be the the ones to decide the election. So other being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign tham a samll state does. Voters in a presidential elections are people who want to express a political prefernce rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1d155f9c4101,3165FA4998BC,"Senator, we should keep the Electoral College. The Electoral College establishes judgement and fairness by giving upcoming presidents a fair shot. People have voices and the popular vote can be biased from state to state. ",Position,Effective,,,
+84141aafbd5b,3165FA4998BC,"The proccess if mature because they chose unbiased electors, and there is a majority of 270 electoral votes. The Electoral College has 538 electors, which gives a good amount of unbiases people. They figure this amount by one for each member in the House of Representaties plus two for the Senators, which you could be one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10c3ffcbd552,3165FA4998BC,The Electoral College is one of the best ways to keep a fair election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44d64e940157,3165FA4998BC,"We people do not make the brightest decisions sometimes, and the Electoral College keeps us from making the wrong decision for who is going to be our next president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7bdc1378f4a3,3165FA4998BC,People can be easily affected into turning on a candidate. They could not realize that the candidate would be a great president. The Electoral College gives the candidates a fair chance. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08b8971c9693,3165FA4998BC,"The member of the Electoral College are fair and know what is best for the country. The specific Electoral electors for your state vote what the state wants, and is not biased on what other senators or electors want. This gives the people a good amount of say in the election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d96e18937917,3165FA4998BC,Electoral Colllege keeps the people in line and gives the people a sense of establishment. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fce1f09664ad,3165FA4998BC,The election of the president is every four years. This gives people time to decide on a new president and who they want representing their votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3590b2fb58aa,3165FA4998BC,Overall the Electoral College is one of the brightest decisions that America has made. For one the Electoral College gives people a fair chance in becoming president. Also the Electoral College helps make the voting process a lot easier. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6f32978c41fb,318F40822873,"Along with the growing influence of technology in society comes the availability to use it to transform the way in which students are educated. With the use of technology, students could be given the responsibility and freedom to complete classes online rather than having to come into school five times a week. However, not all students have the focus and determination like others to be able to hold themselves accountable for completing their classes at home without a physical instructor. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3431306f53f3,318F40822873,"I think students would benefit from being able to take online classes at home, rather than at school, ",Position,Effective,,,
+52f401916c13,318F40822873,it would give students the opportunity to learn at their own appropriate pace ,Claim,Effective,,,
+920a2d4b147f,318F40822873,"it would provide a more comfortable learning environment with less distractions. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+d44a4c8da57f,318F40822873,"While in the classroom, it is difficult for teachers to go at a pace that isn't too slow or too fast for every single student since not every student learns at the same pace. I consider myself a relatively slow learner and writer. Therefore, there have been several instances where my teachers would be lecturing and giving notes, and I found myself missing key information because the teacher was not allowing time for us to write it down. However, unlike my other teachers, my history teacher will make us take notes at home. In this instance, taking notes and learning from home, helped me retain and learn the information better than if I were at school because I was not constantly stressing about the teacher switching the slides, and therefore, potentially missing key concepts. Giving students the opportunity to learn from home allows students to make sure they get all of the necessary information that they may need for later success on a test. It also gives students time to be able to make sure that they understand the information on the notes, rather than just typing or writing it down without understanding the meaning behind it. In addition, some of my teachers make assignments due at the end of class, despite some students, like myself, not being able to finish within the time constraint ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0e97caf091d,318F40822873,Although I understand that it is important to be able to complete assignments quickly for the future ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7a9bd93ad0d2,318F40822873,"I think that in a learning environment that should not be the case. Learning is not about being able to complete an assignment in an hour, but it is about being able to understand new information. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5f81c7b68f82,318F40822873,"Therefore, I think learning from home provides the best learning environment for every student to do well in their education, since they don't have to constantly be overshadowed with the stress of time on important assignments. At home, students are able to ensure that they turn in quality work that will help improve their grades rather than hurt it because of a time constraint. Students should be given the opportunity to take classes from home because not every student learns identically and as quickly as others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8f881c1d5146,318F40822873,"In the event that students would be able to take classes from home, they would also be able to learn in an environment that ensures their greatest focus and success. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07e8fb844201,318F40822873,"However, this can be difficult when there are constant distractions in the classroom ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cd008ae95327,318F40822873,"For example, in my Pre-Calculus class, there is a specific group of students who are constantly found talking over the teacher as she is trying to teach. Not only does this distract the teacher, but it also distracts me and the other students who are trying to learn the material ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1fe3b78f09bc,318F40822873,"To avoid instances like this, students should be able to learn at home where they can sit in a room all by themselves, free from any outside noises or distractions that may hinder their learning ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d647548b09f3,318F40822873,"Other students, and sometimes teachers, are simply just added distractions that make it even more difficult for students to focus on learning the information that the teacher is trying to teach to the class ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b4bf2ce3b117,318F40822873,"Similarly, while in my AP Chemistry class, since I am usually one of the last students to finish the test, there is always a constant moving of students and whispering among the inconsiderate students who cause me to lose focus. It is very challenging for students to concentrate on their thoughts when they are followed by constant whispering and movement going on in the classroom. These distraction may cause students to either get the question wrong or run out of time, therefore, hurting their education ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0924368374ba,318F40822873,"Furthermore, I constantly find myself being more focused doing my homework rather than trying to do my work in school because I am given an appropriate and quiet learning space that helps me concentrate on what I am doing. Allowing students to learn from the comfort of their home helps minimize the many potential distractions from other students and teachers that only cause problems with the student's concentration. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+547f88a44f97,318F40822873,"While trusting students to learn independently may not be appropriate for every student, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e0b51e316e15,318F40822873,it can be an important quality for other students to learn the importance of being responsible for their future. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f13c9b6e6499,318F40822873,"Many high school and college classes have leaned greatly towards using technology for student's to complete and turn in assignments. Nowadays, teachers and professors are mostly used for lecturing which can easily be transmitted online. Therefore, as the years progress, and technology grows to be more influential on society, schools should consider taking advantage of technology to ensure a better educational system for every type of student.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b40e1b5927da,31F19F915306,"Hello i have a few thing to say about this whole thing going on hear. for starters i heard you are think that the students of this school mite have to do community work for a grade or something. are you out of you mind, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+185499ef0f0e,31F19F915306,we should be able to chose to do that work ,Position,Adequate,,,
+345e885ffa68,31F19F915306,some of the kids that will be doing it will not want to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ea339767995,31F19F915306,"if the kids really want top do it but some don't let the kids that want to do and let them have fun. the other kids that don't want to do it. leave them be they don't need to be like all the other people. maybe they want to be doing that work because there lazy or just plan don't want, too. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+337dc78d6a7b,31F19F915306,maybe one of the kids mite get hurt doing it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+740a9ec3e5d8,31F19F915306,"like if they have to pick up trash to ""clean the world"" by picking up the wrong thing and they mite get cut and the parents mite sew or something and you don't want that. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+672d30941043,31F19F915306,now i know i was all into it at the time when we started with a few of my friends ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ad94f70f82d4,31F19F915306,but i don't want to any more i cant stand it. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+67feb75e1154,31F19F915306,some people have base ball or some other sport to go to ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30de0c5ef9a0,31F19F915306,they don't have time to do all that work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3cc68957328,31F19F915306,now do you she what you are doing your making it hard for some of the lazy kids that go to this school and i shall support that as long as i am going to this school i have a say in things. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+40b8652cd2ee,3214BA8B26E6,"After reviewing information about the Electoral College, I believe that the Electoral College should not be used in deciding or electing the president of the United States. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5e9a128a4de4,3214BA8B26E6,"""Under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for President, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the President."" The sitation before states that it is not the President the voters are voting for, it is actually the electors that the people are voting for, who in turn will vote for the President. This situation does not allow for the people to directly vote for who they believe will be the best President. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b4834665bce,3214BA8B26E6,It is really in the hands of the electors who will become President. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4796c5019c71,3214BA8B26E6,"Secondly, after realizing that the number of electoral votes decides if you beome President or not, the Presidential candidates are going to want to focus on obtaining the most votes as possible. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b808c43e8205,3214BA8B26E6,"After determining which states they ""have in the bag"", the candidates are going to put their campaigning efforts toward the ""toss-up"" or ""swing states"". Here they will have to compete in a tight race between the other party to sway the voters of the state to vote their way. This method of campaigning in the swing states doesn't allow for much campaining in the big, numerous votes states. An example of this would be that during the 2000 campaign, almost 20 states did not see the candidates at all as well as campaign ads. With the Electoral College system in place, Presidential candidates are focusing more on obatianing the ""swing state"" votes and not so much on supporting and visiting the states and people they know they have. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a434058d835f,3214BA8B26E6,"Finally, the system of electing electors who then vote for the President can be considered unpredictable. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6929967e9e03,3214BA8B26E6,"This being because the electors could at any time defy the will of the people. These shady electors, also known as ""faithless electors"", can deny to vote for their party's candidate and instead cast the vote for whomever they desire. This shows that it is not the people's choice, instead the choice of the elector. Also, the state legislatures are responsible for choosing the electors. This could cause an issue where the state legislatures are choosing electors who will vote for their party. Let's take it back to the 1960's where an example of this corruption almost took place. Segrigationists, or people who favored racial seperation, who were state legislatures in the state of Louisiana nearly suceeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would not vote for John F. Kennedy. This would've caused the popular vote to go to Kennedy's opponent. For the many reasons listed above, the Electoral College could be considered unpredictable and in some cases... shady. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc7396dbd014,3214BA8B26E6,"Overall Mr. Senator, I believe that the Electoral College should not be used to determine who becomes the President of the United States instead they should use popular vote. This being because the people are not directly voting, the candidates are just focusing on getting the votes and not on the people. And lastly because it can be considered unpredictable with the ""faithless electors"" and bais state legislatures. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4345b39f8b7a,321FA7E39731,I vote yes that we should keep the electoral college in. ,Position,Effective,,,
+92da3a4535b2,321FA7E39731,Its easy to do because you don't have to count  them up yourself. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+547a7f1d84e9,321FA7E39731,"I facts that these four guys even like it (Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,and Bob Dole).
+
+Do you know over 60% of voters would prefer voteing direct election ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35c046e5e55e,321FA7E39731,"We need more people to vote the more voters the better it will look,we don't need to beat aound the tree. This make people feel better to vote then doing it another way. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+082c88131d35,321FA7E39731,The only con of doing this is we don't know who did it. You want think that really matter but it does because some can cheat for somebody. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+58c74b37d9d2,321FA7E39731,"The state legislatures been picking electors since 1960. In Kennedy days when he was running he got cheated out his vote,so he lost ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ec71c7728de,321FA7E39731,but they done fixed all that things going well. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8f2c65859cab,321FA7E39731,This is five reasons the keep the method of voting like that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58dd97be8f07,321FA7E39731,#1 fact there is a certainty of outcome by that i mean it show the popular votes. In 2012 Obama received 61.7% vote and Romney popualr vote was 51.3%.#2 is he/she have to be everybody president. He/she can't play sides like her cant just do the most for the south havt to be fair fot all of them.#3 swing states by sayig that the winner-take-all. So whoever win they take it all the awarding and everything else.#4 big states with big states the elsctoral collegethe balance all it out by the popualr votes. So it compare as a small states so u bout say its even. Last #5 it can stop and avoid run-offs when Nixon and Clinton was running it was a tied at 43%. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b866e4eb7253,321FA7E39731,So do you understand where i'm coming from with this. So keep it easy just let the electoral college stay around. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+101801f34585,326DEFF8D486,"Most of the teenagers use there phones half of there life, Reconsidering the school's cell phone policy is a great idea, for many reason and some of the reasons are these ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b48a5cddcab9,326DEFF8D486,"Even though you say not to bring cell phones to school students still do it , some of the students need to bring there phones to school to communicate with there parents telling them that they're at school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+85e630acc405,326DEFF8D486,"Other students need there phones incase of an emergency, and there parents need to contact there kids or the parents need to be contacted, the school can use there phones. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f3ba89eb008,326DEFF8D486,"It is a great idea letting the students use there phones during lunch or free periods that gives the students a feeling of trust from the school.
+
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+ba3b0e0a939b,326DEFF8D486,Not allowing students to use there phones at all ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+03cefce881b9,326DEFF8D486,is not really going to help. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5d000e280638,326DEFF8D486,"The students will find a way to bring there phones to school and use them while the teachers are not looking. Most of the students are already doing it, why you think putting a new policy is going to help the school it really is not, but by letting the students bring there phones in school and giving them time to use them is going to let the students know that the school trusts them, that the school doesn't think of them as children but as young and responsible adults ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40deac8d2817,326DEFF8D486,To change the policy you have to look at the problem is booth ways in the mind of a teacher and in the mind of a student. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2262b055436f,326DEFF8D486,Some of the teachers may think by bringing a phone to school is a sign of not having respect ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+977767b65357,326DEFF8D486,but it really isn't students don't mean to be rude. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dcd48207d71d,326DEFF8D486,"Sometimes there parents even ask them to bring there phones, other times the students want to bring there phones. The students in the other side feel as if the school doesn't trust them by not letting them bring there phones to school, they feel like children ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81db57c34d05,326DEFF8D486,"All of this can be resolved if you let the students bring there phones to school and have them off and not use them, and letting them use them in there free time ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a76716de0290,327AAC23CF5D,On my Opinion i think is a good way to the student that they can take classes on online or on video chat is a good way to do it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cdcf1d9c4fa5,327AAC23CF5D,some students sometimes some of then they live so far of the school so they dont have other way to educate they self and i think is a good communication to learn. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+337a73733dd2,327AAC23CF5D,"Is a good benefit because is a easy way to do it, easy and fast and is good too because sometimes some days is snowing and when is snowing all school are closed ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2275cc02fa5,327AAC23CF5D,And they close the school because the students can not trasportate to the like that because the streets are freeze and really complicate to transport to the school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6cb9a279192,327AAC23CF5D,If i have to take classes on online or video chat i will because more easy for me and is not difficult to learn on online or video chat ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25bcececc433,327AAC23CF5D,And because i can have more free time i can do more things and i can have a job. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+352da6199b8b,327AAC23CF5D,And think too for some student is not good because they dont have the opportunity to have a computer t do they classes online or they dont have internet is difficult for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4b26d927ee2,327AAC23CF5D,Is a good option online classes but not for all students some of them are benefit and some of them dot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fe4601e39fb,327AAC23CF5D,Only classes are a good reason to use because is a good way to cominitate in a long distance ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+385f6e33aaa6,327AAC23CF5D,"but Free online schools, have to be free all schools online for all students they dont have to pay nothing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ced3a46bb369,327AAC23CF5D,The time if they take online classes they they go not miss nothing because they can star when they want. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a721fbe31399,327AAC23CF5D,On my oponion is a goog way to do it.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b1158744408c,329C6644B488,"I personally think that by you changing the school policy it would make it hard for all the people that enjoy sports with a ""C"" average to even enjoy the activities . I believe that you should not change the school policy because the most kids that enjoy playing academic sports such as Basketball, Track , Cheerleading, Football, soccer ,etc. they wouldn't get a chance to play because the new rule you trying to enforce . I think sports isn't just for everyone with a "" B"" average it should be for everyone that would like to play as long as the have a good grade point average. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7da555ba070e,329C6644B488,As far as the new policy goes I disagree because i feel everybody should be able to participate in activities ,Position,Effective,,,
+c32627eeddb3,329C6644B488,"This is their time to represent with good character and attitude and also have fun and enjoy their time at school . Instead of not being able to play for having a ""C"" grade point average ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a1acb4e87f7,329C6644B488,They have shown effort and that is all that is required is that all students show effort ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49ff665fdab3,329C6644B488,I feel as though it helps to keep the students motivated and on the right path ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02876d5067c3,329C6644B488,knowing they have a reward to look forward to as the go on the field or the track or court. This keep their confidence goes up and the are more energetic to learn and be ready to work and other thing ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0be002d8d5fc,329C6644B488,"not all people have a passion for the same thing and not all students can keep a ""B"" average while working or while playing a sport ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e38af873e5d4,329C6644B488,"i believe we should keep our current policy and the both ""B &C"" average students play sports as well as the others . 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8b3bc04406a6,32B2D5592E1D,This teens manual I talk to talk about expectation. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+68d810e68433,32B2D5592E1D,The first I ready to talk about some expectation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31fe31e53e2c,32B2D5592E1D,"That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4192ee9319b0,32B2D5592E1D,"for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. Other example, regularity students nope have the opportunity go to the schools because the students things they not equality or things he/her can't do anythings to learning. I support the way to some teachers or one person is working to schools or some people have permission to teacher to go the house the person nope lost any classes they provide. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a81df8dff145,32B2D5592E1D,"The another reason, Responsability, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+037513b6ae8e,32B2D5592E1D,"for example, the place where I born people need to walk a lot distance to go learning and graduation some teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. Other example, some time the people nope have transport or some people not have money to pay the transport to go schools. To graduate or learning more you do a lot things to graduate, however, if you put you responsibility you can do a lot or things to learning. Always the people is intelligent to great in school they can obtain beneficial scholarship to helping you and the family. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5d290957c96,32B2D5592E1D,Reason of this teens. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+68831886f01d,32B2D5592E1D,"People take classes the way online, some examples, a lot people taking that's way because some people are elder; but they things is better to graduate because he/she work and others things. Some people things that's is more better for then I things that's is great to do both side. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Always one person in class is coming four or less days to schools the attends is so bad students things is better go to work that's why a lot students take that's route. Some students don't matter anythings about the school, however, students particularity not a lot both some person things bad. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b77ca53e96b,32B2D5592E1D,"Next reason, offer to learning to night is better too, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c1e560353c82,32B2D5592E1D,"for example, some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. A lot students take the opportunity to finish the school online. Person take that opportunity is because they have another weigh, for example, they go to work or stay in home to do nothing about his life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+472d7686b1f1,32B2D5592E1D,"That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. The place where I born person walk a lot distance to learning and somethings to graduation some when teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. My options I take the position to learning or finish my high school online, because that's really great to explain another person your experience about to finish school online. Always the person things somethings they not have good ideas to his life or something similarity. Opportunity great things for the person have major action.
+
+Great take both ideas in this teens.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b97117677267,32C41C1CBA06,I understand that you are considering two possible policies that have to do with using cell phones in school ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4268ac0bd591,32C41C1CBA06,"I think that you should think of allowing students to bring phones to school and let them use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time. ",Position,Effective,,,
+34c718e53f40,32C41C1CBA06,"thirty percent of the population of children are getting in trouble in school because of the use of cell phones in school. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4938fdca3ef8,32C41C1CBA06,"First of all, if students have cell phones then they will be tempted to use it and might get in trouble if they use it in class secretly because they are not allowed to use them in school ",Claim,Effective,,,
+642e9b122383,32C41C1CBA06,. Lets say that students are in class and they feel the urge to text because they have not used the phone that day. They will want to use it in class but they will do it secretly so the teacher wont take it away. For example there was this kid in my class and while we were in the middle of the lesson he would take out the phone while the teacher had her back to us and start using it. If you put the policy that will let us use our cell phones in school during lunch periods and free time then we will have enough texting done so that we will not need to text anymore until school is finished or until their next free time. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+3358817c88cf,32C41C1CBA06,"Second of all, if we were able to use our phones in lunch periods or free times then what will be the point of students getting in trouble all the time because of cell phones. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d4ebb39b81a5,32C41C1CBA06,"Just think about it, if students aren't able to use their phones in school at all then they will use it no matter what the case is because they feel the urge to do it. They will feel the need to do it because either they receive text that will make them want to reply back or they become so obsessed with using them that they think that they have to use it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0704e5912d1,32C41C1CBA06,"Lastly, you wont have teachers complaining about their students not paying attention in class due to the fact that the students are always on their cell phones. Most teachers have to stop the lesson because they have to waste their time taking students cell phones away. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0b4f01aef31d,32C41C1CBA06,If you put the policy that students can use their phones at free times and lunch periods then teachers wont be interrupted anymore and will just have to worry about teaching the students about what they have to learn to pass to the next grade. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+92720b1c6289,32C41C1CBA06,"Finally, that is why it would be a great idea to put the policy that will let the students use their cell phones at free times and lunch periods. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f1bd30295c56,32C41C1CBA06,I mean sure if students aren't allowed to use their phone at all because of school rules then they might be willing to not use it because they wouldn't want it taken away. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ad5f8d4bb183,32C41C1CBA06,But just think about the amount of students that will be able to pay attention in class because they won't need to use their phone. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+274ee48b95fb,32C41C1CBA06,I hope you take my letter to consideration and put a policy that will allow students to use their phones freely during free times and lunch periods. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+95ca3e7f2065,32D0A06A0A23,Principal such not do this become most students have c' s in there class ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6d806811424a,32D0A06A0A23,what happen if you were that student that want to play a sport. Most kid will not be happy if you did this. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb4bff1fd12d,32D0A06A0A23,The kid will get there grade up when they can not do it. Your school will win against other school in the united states. your school be know as the best sport teams. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+45dab5d389af,32D0A06A0A23,other activities help students in class room. same activities are good for the students in different class room ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f6f71e217f14,32D0A06A0A23,same other students came from other place for this activities. same kid will leave there families to get this education. those kid go back after there education is finish to help there family. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fbfa58998bcd,32D0A06A0A23,"same love playing sport like basketball,soccer,baseball,and other sports they have only c' s grade. students that love sport they will do whatever to be in that sport ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d2818aca5c3,32D0A06A0A23,"same of there grade are C' s and that all there grade in there class room. most kid have grades of a c' s they sould still be in sports or activities. the kid listen, pass test, do they homework just to be in a sport or activities. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fa7c5d6ab9ac,32E3A5BDD0B2,I believe that we should not keep the Electoral College because i feel as if it would be easier for people to vote somore people would actually vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+79d00e980196,32E3A5BDD0B2,"I know the Electoral College was established by our fouding fathers, but it is time to tart with something new and for something new to be established. I would honestly choose the popular vote because it also puts a suspence on people about who will win. The Electoral College may be widely regrded as an anachronism but when we vote we do not vote for a presidential candidate we're actually voting for slate electors. The college does not have a democratic pedigree which is another reason why we should use popular vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48bafcc0936b,32E3A5BDD0B2,When i vote i like to know as soon as possible and i feel as if we had popular vote it would be faster to do. Opinoins may not be taken inconcideration but my opinion is strong that we should use popular vote i really feel like more people would come to vote if we used that. People may feel like the Electoarl College is too long of a process so they just say oh i dont have to go vote so im not going to. The Electoral College avoids elections but without them how would we know about our future president and how would we know whether or not the person would do a good job at running our country? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9de32b48ff31,32E3A5BDD0B2,Overall i will stay with popular vote but if they choose not to do it that will not stop me from voting to choose who will run my country and do a good job at it! i know that whatever desicion is made was for the best intrest for our country.11    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7d5ed6771a8b,33008B95DE9C,I think that our president's should be chosen by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7bcb7c8bf302,33008B95DE9C,they have better chances of winning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ae155c49d2e,33008B95DE9C,"they will know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3abaae47f1cc,33008B95DE9C,The president's have better chances of winning because they can have the most votes and wouldn't have to wait on the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eab4c9bcef0b,33008B95DE9C,"Such as paragraph 9 says, ""Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" I think that was unfair because Al Gore could of been the president but instead he was not, after all the campaigning he did to get those voters to vote for him it ended up as a waste because the voting didn't get him anywhere. If I was a president I would be highly upset because I knew I could have a big chance of losing just because of the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb27fb55fc6c,33008B95DE9C,What doesn't make any sense to me is that the voters are not voting for the president but are voting for a slate of electors. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+600c9424a27f,33008B95DE9C,"What's the whole point of voting then? People are out here voting for electors that they don't even know and most of the electors are people who not holding public office. In paragraph 13 it says, ""During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad."" To me they are cheating people out of their votes, people vote for the one that they think could make a change not just voting just to be voting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c85e30d7e16,33008B95DE9C,The president would know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9758efc74c5a,33008B95DE9C,The electoral college votes won't help them know who is really for them and who's not because if someone win over electoral votes there are going to be people out there mad about the fact that they had won. This will make people not want to vote at all because 9 times out of 10 the person they are voting for gone lose. The electoral college just makes it difficult for the people that are running for president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e452fe34f5d,33008B95DE9C,"I'm not saying that it should be easy to just become something big, but if you worked hard enough I think that you should be honored enough to become president through popular votes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a7d2e1b578a5,33008B95DE9C,"This will make the incoming president feel appreciated for all the hard work they did to recieve all these votes. They will know that what they are trying to set forward is good for some people and not just for them. Such as paragraph 12 says, ""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote."" What would happen then? That's why you should just give it to the person with the most votes because they deserve it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4026c04798f5,33008B95DE9C,"I hope what I have really proved my argument that we should change the way a president is chosen so it can be fair to everyone. I think this will make the incoming president feel confident in himself to make this happen. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+82a658005c72,33475A71956C,"Dear, Principal I think students at our school should be required to do community service. There are many reasons they should do community service. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+76446efef0ec,33475A71956C,One of the reasons is that all the students should be involved in the community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01a0b07d04fa,33475A71956C,Another reason is so that instead of the students going out and doing drugs and hurting the community they could help the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88cc2c70ece6,33475A71956C,The only reason that people get bored in school is because they don't think that they are helping there future in school because they don't feel involved. But if they are required to do community service they would feel involved and it would help there future. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87106df84d38,33475A71956C,"If the students volunteered at a elementary school it won't just help the volunteer it would also help the elementary student. If we help the elementary student it would not just help his future but ours to. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afeee6cc6dc7,33475A71956C,Here at our school it would be great to have to require community service it wont just help us but it would also help our future. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cc3773fabd15,336787F2B202,Dear senatoris it posible for you to change the electoral college to election by popular vote for the president of the united states because its better. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d24e1b1f7b3d,336787F2B202,"Acording to source one, the electoral college consists of 538 electors"".""A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president"". Thats alot of votes that electoral college needs. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3939452253ee,336787F2B202,"In source two it says ""over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+367b6ea04880,336787F2B202,"More people prefer the direct vote because under the electoral college system voters vote for for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. acording to the article in reason one.""In 2012 obama received 61.7 persent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romeny. because almost all states award electoral college votes on a winner- takes-all basis"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34f5e4b002c9,336787F2B202,"for example in reaosn five ""nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in the electoral college(301 and 370 electoral votes,respectively).alot of people say that electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candident. people that are in presidental elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a singel vote may decide an election.         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+54ca1a46f1c0,339048408CDE,"No I think that the Electoral College does not work, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1c7220a911ca,339048408CDE,One reason is each running canidate for president has its own has his or her own group of electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7312bbf39df3,339048408CDE,"The electors are usually picked by the canidate's political party. Which is good that they have there own because then the votes would just be a landslide on the outcome of it. Then the citizens votes come in and thats when the votes start to seperate in total, because theres more citizens voting for the other runner than there are electors of those running presidents and vice presidents. Now every state has there own amount of electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cf0de64914bb,339048408CDE,"under this system you vote for the electors, who in turn vote for the president. And for instance you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for someone, you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors that pledged to that person, then he would get all those electoral votes for the state of Texas. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ceb60be7e9c,339048408CDE,"voters can't always control who there electors vote for but they can sometimes, if they know who there electors are voting for. And they also sometimes get confused about the electors and sometimes vote for the wrong canidate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+27395acac076,339048408CDE,"So pretty much at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+756d914108c0,339048408CDE,Because of the winner-take-all system in each state. Canidates dont spend time in states thet know they dont have no chance of winning. And it doesnt really give them a chance to vote for who they want to vote for the electors do that part. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78eb36d4b7d5,339048408CDE,The most worried outcome of the votes is a tie in the electoral vote part ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+584d258d215c,339048408CDE,"If that happens the election would be decided by the House Of Representatives, where they will vote on the president. And the senate would choose the vice-president. Because each state gives out only one vote. But the House's selection will most likely not reflect on the peoples choice. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdcd69995084,339048408CDE,"Well thats what i think of the electoral college, its unfair, and outdated. I think we should get rid of this system because its reallly bad towards voters, and it  would make voting have more freedom other than leaving your voting up to the electors,  instead of yourself. And the winner-take-all system is dumb also because you have really no control over who wins if that system is available. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+62ad01fb4e6f,33ADAAB38BFC,Should students be allowed to have cell phones during school? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0e33901263ab,33ADAAB38BFC,I think that students shouldn't be able to have cell phones at school at all ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7e7dd10fccc5,33ADAAB38BFC,first its to distracting and the student wont be learning anything because he/she would be occupied doing something there not supposed to be doing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15ac91f458c1,33ADAAB38BFC,Second is school is a leaning environment not a place to be doing other things with your cell phone we come to school to learn! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7ef9e9e491d,33ADAAB38BFC,The third why i think having cell phones on campus is because we all have ore free time to do whatever we have to do. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e2686f7addaf,33ADAAB38BFC,"For example , we need to forces on more important things such as school work and maybe after school activates. I think we shouldn't be able to have our phones because 50% of students that have cell phones fail there classes because while the teacher is explaining something important the student us either messing around or texting another student which is not only affecting he/she but others around them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bdf9d26f5784,33ADAAB38BFC,We come to school for one reason and one reason only at that is to go to school and get the education we need for a better future and all of the above. We need to help all students get ahead of life and have good jobs that they could all be proud of. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0caa0c8f2197,33ADAAB38BFC,i do understand we also have to have a social life and communicate with other students or peers. Not everything is fun and games sometimes we just need to expect the what our parents do what they do because they love and care about us. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ceff14a1504,33ADAAB38BFC,We shouldn't be able to have cell phones because honestly its just a waste of time and we could do so much better and if we do a good job in school than we would have time for other things because in life there is time for everything but it also has its own time. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+860475d358b5,33E67D072963,I believe that most students should volunteer in community service. It really could help the world we live in today. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a3419c4be98,33E67D072963,"People just throw things on the ground and kill our world, by not treating it right ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5feedd9afc0,33E67D072963,It would help our school raise more money for more activities and we could help other people by making the world better for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fb189d13048,33E67D072963,"Some people laugh at people doing community service, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a03fe7d05f9d,33E67D072963,"but what they really should be doing is helping them. They know that doing things for other people, or the community, is the right thing ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4cbeebe062df,33E67D072963,"So i believe that our school should take a full day off, out side, help other people clean up streets, parks, and yards. It would be a lot of help, and even if we don't get paid, we all know we did the right thing. Our world could be a much better place than what it is now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+132cfe84437f,33E67D072963,We don't always have to depend on technology to do everything for us. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5025faec3a8c,33E67D072963,"Especially cars, way back people didn't depend on cars, because they weren't even invented, but they had to walk where ever they needed or wanted to go. Whether women were with child, someone had a broken leg, or u could've been sick. Either way, they still kept going until the reached their destination. They couldn't depend on all the technology we have today. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4453e6905b1c,33E67D072963,like help someone walk their dog or dig up a garden. Maybe help an elder cross the street ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5a8bcc645fb,33E67D072963,You shouldn't expect someone to give cash right away either. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc939a2ab402,33E67D072963,"So i believe that our school should get up and make a change for once. There should be no more sitting around, doing things we already know, when we could out there, in the world, helping others, learning new things, and how all of this is useful to us. We could show our town, our community, and everyone else in the world, that we were given an amazing thing. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ac5c1ac19805,34263BB26432,I believe that we should get rid of  the electoral college system ,Position,Adequate,,,
+37c244978d4f,34263BB26432,it has so many flaws ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b7ffa2ea035,34263BB26432,"The electoral college has robbed prsidental canidates like (Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob dole, & Al Gore) of their chance of becoming president, even after they won the popular vote, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+467b2a8bc3a4,34263BB26432,but their not the only ones who wants a change to the way we elect our presidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d627797fdad,34263BB26432,recent studies show that over 60 percent of voters would like a change to the way we elect our president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4dd4204ce5d,34263BB26432,The second thing that is wrong with the electoral college is that your not voting for the president your voting for the electors who pledged to that person ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fb36153fd89,34263BB26432,"Also people from larger states are complaining about what happens with a tie because if their is a tie the house of representives decide,but the thing that is crazy is that 1) representative from Wyoming would have a much say a the 55) representatives from California. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ef8d87cb1cd,34263BB26432,The third and final thing that is wrong with the electoral college is that the electoral college is unfair to the voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f86edde338d,34263BB26432,"because the winner take all system canidates don't spend a lot of time in states they know they will not win. Canidates will only focus on the areas that they know or have a strong chance of winning. Like the year 2000 campaign seventeen states did not see the Canidates such like Rhode Island, & South Carolina, so how do they think they feel not knowing the person running this country? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c4adcef92bb,34263BB26432,I strongly feel like you guys should really consider a change to the way we select our president ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b5063e6b97f,3426E5BCA485,"There is no doubt that cell phones are very important to our every day lives. They allow people to get in contact with each other in just the click of a button. But they can also cause problems, not just at home, but in school too. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e988a5e79bd1,3426E5BCA485,Which is why I believe that Policy 2 is the right choice. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f081678cf441,3426E5BCA485,"They are a distraction to students, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+11b6e4eb1a0c,3426E5BCA485,"an easy way to cheat, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+741ac1bb4ac1,3426E5BCA485,can cause serious problems such as rumors and gossip. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+952a2147887b,3426E5BCA485,"If cell phones were allowed during classes, instead of only during lunch periods and other free times, they would be put to use constantly. Students would be able to communicate through text message throughout the classroom, and the teacher would never know. If a student had an Internet connection on his/her phone, they would be able to play games, go on websites that are not allowed in school, and so on. This would all take place right under the teacher's nose, but they would have no way of knowing what was going on. This could be a serious problem for a student's education too. Since cell phones are such a distraction, Students could miss important lessons taught that day, and may fall behind. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+162a9a8e71aa,3426E5BCA485,"Imagine a student doing his work, and suddenly he doesn't know the answer to a problem. Fortunately, he has his cell phone in his pocket, and can look up the answer on the internet. If cell phones are allowed during class, students can easily get information of the web, without doing to work nessacery.
+
+During tests, students can send messages back and forth on what the answers are, and the teacher would never know. This is a problem, because students who are caught cheating can end up in serious trouble. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+13ab0934b99c,3426E5BCA485,"Cell phones can come to use once in a while; if you need to contact a parent or guardian, or if there is an emergency, your able to call some one right away. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7aeab5fa1830,3426E5BCA485,"If there was an emergency, isn't that what the school phone in the office is for? If students really needed to call someone, they can simply get a pass and go down to the office to use their phone. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9528d5bcd764,3426E5BCA485,"Rumors can ruin a persons reputation, that's a known fact. High school students and even middle school students love to talk. If cell phones were allowed, rumors would fly around the school. In a matter of minutes, everyone would know the latest gossip, just by one person pressing the ""Send to all"" button. This can lead to bullying, which could also lead to a flaw in that student's education. So no matter what, cell phones are a disadvantage to a school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0da97f7ca41e,3426E5BCA485,"As you can see, their are many more cons then there are pros for cell phones allowed during class. Policy 2 is the right choice because it allows students to get in touch with whoever they need to contact, It can keep a student from cheating and save them the trouble that comes along with it, and it is also a way to slow down rumors, and a save a child's reputation. All just by removing cell phones from school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+080780e6c352,346D40A69BBF,The Electoral College has been well working for many year and think that we shouldn`t change it because it been an well know process for elections for the pasted years of our country`s history. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b4514e0e0ba8,346D40A69BBF,"The Electoral College is a process, consider a place. Our founding fathers established it in the our country`s Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by voting in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.
+
+The process of the Electoral College consists of the selection of the electors. They vote for th President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The Electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state`s entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation, one for each member in the House of Representives plus two for your Senators. Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia(DC) is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. Every candidate running for President in your state has his or her own electors group.
+
+The electors generally are chosen by the candidate`s political party, but the states laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November, you help help choose your state`s electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate`s electors. Than after the presidential election, your governor prepared a "" Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascetainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will resprent your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year. Under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4c3c937e45af,346D40A69BBF,"The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century, the system allows for much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+63ebeb155e3e,346D40A69BBF,"That is why we should keep the Electoral College, because it to is party of what make our country`s history.  ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1ac9653b4467,3493BED78E8E,We should abolish the Electoral College and change the election to popular vote for the president of the United States. The Electoral College is corupt compared to popular vote. They're more cons than pros about  the Electoral College. A lot of people agree that we should change our voting to popular vote. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0abe8178bd24,3493BED78E8E,"Electoral College voting should not be the way we vote for something so important. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+26f3464aae6d,3493BED78E8E,The Electoral College System is wrong. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1bc5afe3dfcc,3493BED78E8E,"In source two, Bradford Plumer said that ""under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president"". You have no clue who your voting in with the Electoral College system. Plumer also said ""they can be anyone not holding public office"" and ""electors could always defy the will of the people"". Do you really want someone who you dont know and can't trust to be an elector? If you wanted someone like that you might as well let a child do the job. In source one the Office of the Federal Register said ""when you vote for your canadidate you are actually voting for your candidates elector's"". More than one source said that you vote in electors when voting for a your candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2934fb0ef5d8,3493BED78E8E,The Electoral College system is said to be unfair to voters in source two ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdf7f9134cf6,3493BED78E8E,"The Electoral College system has a ""winner-take-all"" system. Which means if a Democrat candidate wins they will have Democrat electors and if a Republican wins the will have Republican electors. In source one the Office of the Federal Register also said that the ""winner-take-all"" system ""awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate"". This is not fair to the voters or the United States. If a tie happened it would be even more unfair to voters. if a tie did happen the House of Representatives would break it. In source two Plumer said ""the House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. If the voting doesnt even show your will why vote? Plumer also said in source two that ""the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational"". I agree with plumer, the Electaral College needs to go. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+132d5be65b94,3493BED78E8E,Even though the Electoral College has a lot more cons than pros they have some pros ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+06d7a700cbc0,3493BED78E8E,"In source three Posner give you the ""five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"". Posner said the first reason was ""certainty of outcome"". The second reason is ""the Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal"". the third and fourth reason is ""swing states"" and ""big states"". the fifth reason is the Electoral College system can ""avoid run-off elections"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b2c5dc4b4d5,3493BED78E8E,"These are all pros of keeping the Electroral College, but are they really worth it? Would you rather have these pros compared to having fairness? ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e0b2861ca158,3493BED78E8E,"We should abolish the Electoral College and change the election to popular vote for the president of the United States. Popular voting is alot better for everyone. The pros of popular voting excedes the pros of the Electoral College. Popular voting gives everyone a fair chance and doesnt just have a ""winner-take-all"" system. it actually gives both political parties a chance. I agree with source two when it said ""Abolish the Electoral College!"". Source two was right we need to put an end to the Electoral College system!  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f328fae3bc2d,34C430A25890,I believe students shouldn't have to do community service if they don't want to. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+24e2d707f727,34C430A25890,"It shouldn't be a priority for students to help. It should be a decided thing whether the student wants to or not. Kids all want to have fun and most students don't want to spend their time doing community service. So why make them? Let kids have fun, let kids decide whether or not they want to do community service. Its the right thing to do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+de2e4949895f,34C430A25890,Making it a priority for students to do community service can mess up students education. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3a12deb3202c,34C430A25890,"If the principle made students have a class for community service could you imagine the lack of education the kids can be getting. What about the lack of physical education? What if doing community service took up physical education classes?, How do you think your students would feel? Them not being able to run around and hang out will make them furious if id didn't have physical education I'd be angry too! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+777483cdbed4,34C430A25890,"Yes, i know community service is something to better build your character, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f3b8e959e0c3,34C430A25890,but do teenagers really need community service? Sooner or later teenagers will figure out how to become better people. Its all part of growing up. Let your students grow up. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+05828a9b0d65,34C430A25890,"So do you rather, making it a priority for your students to do community service or not? Do you rather them miss out on part of their education just to clean a field or to read to little children? Isn't that why we have teachers? Or do you want your students to be mad at their principle because there's not time to hang out or get all their energy out? Take it from me a student myself, you should let students have time to hang out its the best thing for kids our age. Making kids do community service may take that time up. Don't make it a priority for community service! Community service is not that big a deal! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4c6b8e954d41,350376FA39BD,I believe we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dfaff2703dde,350376FA39BD,Because it would be better for our country ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b9464d920d7,350376FA39BD,"The Electoral College is a process. This process consists of the selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice presient. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is require to elect the president. Under the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of Columbia allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e42d7a4b0905,350376FA39BD,I am aware that the Electoral College has some flaws ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a6f497aaa607,350376FA39BD,but nothings ever gonna be just the way you want right? ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1060df8bfeaa,350376FA39BD,"Under the electoral college system, votetrs vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Also the electoral college is unfair to voters. It is unfair becuase of the winner-take-all system in each state. Candidates dont go to states they know there not going to win in. The Electoral College is outdated and irrational. But the best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b27c6cce9723,350376FA39BD,In addition there are also good things about this electoral system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c38cb555ceb3,350376FA39BD,"For Example, the Electoral College resotres some of the weight in the politcial balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution. The Electoral College also avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recevies a majority of the vostes cast ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cd6bccd390a,350376FA39BD,"Furthermore, The Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state Democrats ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+67c469392712,350376FA39BD,But of Course no voter's vote swings a national election American population did vote in 2012 election ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0a1f65611401,350376FA39BD,In conclusion these are the resons why I believe that we should keep the Electoral College.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03e1659babca,35279D8353D6,First i want to say that i agree and disagree with your decision. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38cec07b5984,35279D8353D6,I agree because students shouldn't get lower than a B but also a C average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e0b3c425f0b,35279D8353D6,I disagree because students should have sports if their average is a C... ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d500c6a9d39,35279D8353D6,"that C don't mean they are flunking it means that they are in average to play sports, because the GPA you should have to play sports is a 2.5 or above. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02ca0df5cf18,35279D8353D6,I think you should let the students who have a C average play because when they have something to keep them entertain they will bring their grades up because they would want to stay in the sport they in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+34445d3c6f7a,35279D8353D6,"I kind of agree with you because if you let somebody with a C average in a sport they wouldn't try their best to get it up because they are going to think ""oh they let me in with a C average that means i can keep it that way."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aeb538e458bc,35279D8353D6,"You just have to come up with some agreements you can come up with and share them with the students and see if they agree with you, and they disagree with you than just don't let them in the sport they sign up for. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aa8f08fff369,352CEEDDF08C,I am on both sides for this argument. I like the idea for helping others and you not get paid but I also am an active kid and I wouldn't have much time to perform the tasks required by you. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b6ad0e15b31c,352CEEDDF08C,I agree with requiring the students to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bb2f599480ad,352CEEDDF08C,I agree with this because I like to be that guy that helps others with no cost. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dba820ccf2a6,352CEEDDF08C,I also like that idea because I have done it before and i' m willing to do what is required again. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c8045cc9d35,352CEEDDF08C,"I also feel that this will give all of the lazy kids an opportunity to not be lazy and get up from the couch and make a difference for there community, my community, our community. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ca43d484ccc,352CEEDDF08C,"This also may turn around the lives of the more ""bad"" kids that drink and also do other bad things like drugs and stuff. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+220dd1e82409,352CEEDDF08C,"If you are able to make that much of a difference in our community, then you most probable will get best principal of the year and maybe you'll get transferred to a high school and be the principal there and then you'll probable have a better salary. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+daee4186459e,352CEEDDF08C,I also do agree with the other side of the argument. I agree with the other side because like me many people are very busy with school already ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c12669496038,352CEEDDF08C,"We all have to do homework. Some of us are involved with after school activity's(sports, and clubs). Then there is also kid's like me that not only don't have time on the weekdays for community service but on the weekends I have no time for it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44876202e6c2,352CEEDDF08C,I along with lots of other people disagree with this argument. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2365d07fe297,352CEEDDF08C,Also if you go through with this then you might be hated by many of the students because they hate school as it is and now they are required to do community service. I don't think that they will like that idea all that much. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df29aebf9b87,352CEEDDF08C,That is the reasoning behind the fact that I agree with both sides here ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+012804dd845a,3544D0B1BCDB,"I am writing you in concern of the new policy which you have been considering with the school board. In case you have forgotten, and I mean so in the utmost respect, it is just that people have a tendency to forget things, the new policy which has been suggested is to change school policy so that students are not allowed to participate in sports or other activities unless they have a B grade average. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0213e105a8c9,3544D0B1BCDB,"In my opinion, this change is immensely unfair to the student body, will cause disarray among the different clubs, and will hurt the school much more than it will aid the school. My understanding is that you are considering this policy change so that students will work harder to retain a B average and so the student body will improve, however, you must also consider the numerous possible negative consequences. ",Position,Effective,,,
+9cbb5f640412,3544D0B1BCDB,"First however, I believe some background knowledge is required. As you know already, a C grade average is considered average in most of our country, where as a B or an A average are considered above average, and outstanding, respectively. Also, as you may know already, most of the student body retains a C average. Your change in school policy would mean that everybody who is currently participating in school activities would be kicked out of them until new term grades come in at which point they may only hope that they did well enough to continue their sport. Our competitive would all fail do to the almost complete rooting of the students. Now this may only last a term, but who knows how long it might take to raise your grade average by a whole letter? You obviously went to school when you were a child, and I assume you enjoyed the extra curricular clubs which your school had to offer. Now imagine this. Imagine that you learned that you had to maintain an A or B average to continue in these sports. Now this was one of the years where you didn't do so well, and therefore got a C average. Wouldn't such a thing be detrimental to you? It would cause you to be kicked out of every activity which you participated in unless you managed to raise your grade! That is one the main points I am putting forth. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f304562cfa82,3544D0B1BCDB,Such a change is not fair to the student body because the student body usually only maintains a C average! ,Claim,Effective,,,
+88d852d7e180,3544D0B1BCDB,people's grades are not always constant. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d8bc0fe1bd19,3544D0B1BCDB,"A student may get straight As one term but in the next term may get straight Cs. That would mean the activities would have an inconsistent flow of students for every term. The students who had improved their average would join their respective clubs but the students who had not would be forced to withdraw from their activities. The sports teams would fail because every player they got with the new term would not be as practised as the ones which they had from the old term. And what if their all-star line-up could not retain the necessary grade point average? Then victory for our sports teams would almost be impossible. I do not doubt the skills of the students within our school, but skill given and skill learned are to different things to consider. A person who is not great at basketball but who goes to every practice and tries as hard as he can at home might as well match a natural-born super star at basketball who doesn't practice due to arrogance. Which also brings me back to how such a change would be unfair. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a237f64f5292,3544D0B1BCDB,A person who might spend a huge amount of time practicing their sport but who was not the best academic wise would find themselves in an incredibly bad spot. They would not be allowed to participate in the sport which they loved until they academically improved. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a33b6ab16b8,3544D0B1BCDB,And this change might cause them to much stress to be able to improve. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+35831da4fd34,3544D0B1BCDB,"Students would easily find themselves in depression when they are unable to retain the correct grade average and such a thing would never be good for a school. Also people would have to deal with the stress of knowing that if they do not do well enough in school, they will not be able to participate in the things which they love. Such a thing is almost the same as bribing students to do well in school. Because they do well enough they're allowed to play a sport or join a club but if they don't they cannot do anything extra-curricular. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4548d54f0740,3544D0B1BCDB,"this would thoroughly disorganise after-school help due to the fact that after-school help falls under the category an ""other activity."" Students who needed help would not be able to get it through conventional methods within school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5380501e632b,3544D0B1BCDB,"And what about the special education children or the less intelligent students who struggle just to pass? What about the people who can only get a C if they try their hardest? They would find themselves isolated, neither able to do well in school, nor able to do well in sports or other activities because they wouldn't be allowed to participate in them. Though I may be talking extremes, such a thing would be likely to increase the possibility that one of those misfortunate students would commit suicide! And a life is a life no matter how that person does in academics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88301bb07ebb,3544D0B1BCDB,"Certainly you cannot think that such a change would be a good thing for the school! All it would bring is chaos and stress and the amount of people who improve would also find themselves always under pressure, always struggling to be above average. There are various things that could go wrong under such a monumental change. It would certainly be unfair to the students, the activities would be very disorganized (some of them might even be forced to close due to lack of participants), and it would be unhealthy for all your students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+20b929ddef5f,3583374DF150,"Electoral voting is a voting system that is trash. No one likes it, its not fair for the people to have somone else (The Electors) vote for them. How do we have freedom of speech if were not the one's who are voting? Electoral votes are not what we need if we the people what a good president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+43477c4b573f,3583374DF150,"The majority of the popular vote in the united states should determine who sits in the
+
+White House ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d62e196a6c86,3583374DF150,"Abolishing the Electoral College is the best thing the the United States could do. Under the Electoral Cololege system, we the voters (people) vote not for our president but for a slate of electors that hopefully elect the president you want. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c144d089e35,3583374DF150,"We can not controll who the elects vote for, plus we somtimes dont know the electors we are voting for. If the people of the state of Florida wants to have a Republican president but the elector wants a Democratic president then most likely thats who he is going to vote for is the Democratic candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ac176a652ea4,3583374DF150,The popular vote is fair and is more likely to get sucessful persidents that people will like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec6b75982199,3583374DF150,"It's like ""
+
+American Idole
+
+"" you have to perform good, you have to sound good, and u have to be sucessful. You have to get two out of the three judges to say yes in order for you to go to Hollywood. Same thing with the popular vote system, u have to get two-thirds of the popular vote in order to be persident. It's alot better than to worry about who your elector is going to vote for, all they care about (sadly) is the money. We look beyond the money and look at things like: Food, Education, Gas, Roads, Highways, Trade, Money,etc... ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+844591cade38,3583374DF150,Lets make a differnce as a country and not let people do things for us because thats takeing our freedom away. Lets get rid of the dumb electoral system and lets use the popular vote becasue thats when your voice is herd and your vote counts.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3ce6bfd05589,35DE2CC6BBD9,I think it is a good idea for the student's to be in community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c33bb9f67948,35DE2CC6BBD9,It will help the environment so the earth can be healthy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ead8966d3a0d,35DE2CC6BBD9,"I knew a friend that was in community service in 2009 he now lives in Rosemont, Illinois he picked up trash all over were he lives. But some of the students don't want to do something like this to prevent gases of pollution on earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5783ef6d7e3,35DE2CC6BBD9,I have been trying to make people under stand what it mean's to help. They don't want to help because they just want to litter throw can's not recycle or any thing to help ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea57b2f8dc64,35DE2CC6BBD9,What I need are some people that care to do some of the community service ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b27f13725cf6,35DE2CC6BBD9,Take Disney's friend for change they are helping kid's unpollute there town's or cities. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+096753b4c10f,35DE2CC6BBD9,What we really need are some special people to help for this community service one's that care for there planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06d391da1bea,35DE2CC6BBD9,these crises on our planet need to stop all what they have done. i have received a letter from my friend that moved to Illinois has cleaned up the whole city with some help in just 1 month. If you know any one who can help with this call. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+255389f5e00f,35DE2CC6BBD9,This is my idea what we should do to help our community. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a3543e94178b,360F4E7D2631,"I strongly believe that community service is something good, ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+df2e08aedadf,360F4E7D2631,that all the students should be willing to perform community service in some way. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+226f2ea729d3,360F4E7D2631,Community service teaches us many valuable things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23dd7cacb5d9,360F4E7D2631,And it also gives us the opportunity to aid others that need it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0b9baa39376,360F4E7D2631,"First, is a way of helping, and growing together as a community. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d56faf369f3f,360F4E7D2631,"we shouldn't expect someone else to do our job. We are the future of our community/country; and if we are growing up expecting we don't have to do anything, we will have very few chances of being successful. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5194bfedb24,360F4E7D2631,"Like if we like math, or are good at it, we could tutor those who need more help. Or if we are interested in justice, or working for peace, we could volunteer at places that do that kind of work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d7503b8027df,360F4E7D2631,"Furthermore, community service doesn't have to be boring, we could take our friends, or siblings. Then they will learn from our example, we will have company, and our virtues will spread throughout our community. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+41ce7423b8ab,360F4E7D2631,"Finding ways to perform community service is very easy; just talk to your parents, neighbors, classmates, etc. Something else is that it doesn't have to be the biggest thing ever. Small actions will lead to great achievements.
+
+Doing small actions every day, sometimes without even planning, will help our community grow in many ways. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bf6befd28ee,360F4E7D2631,"When we need help we will know that our neighbor or classmate will be there to help us and will take care of us. When we are older, the younger kids we showed all those virtues, will keep passing them to their family, friends. Soon we will see all the great things we achieved. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4d5eef6f862,360F4E7D2631,"Please help us develop a great community, learn great things, and give us different      ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f6a9182ddb50,36403757FA10,I personally feel that the electoral college is just plain unfair ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47d35ee79352,36403757FA10,I don't think it's necessary to even have it at all because what's the point if the votes aren't equal for all states? it's a very irrational process. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40c6cd544321,36403757FA10,"It isn't right if a president wins the popular votes but doesn't win by electoral votes and it results in him/her not becoming president. If someone votes for a slate of electors and they end up not even voting for who they're ""supposed"" to be voting for then what's the purpose of electing them anyway? There is no purpose unless you want the other party to win which i highly doubt that. The electoral college affects the voting of states because if the majority of their state is republicans and they're democratic, there vote isn't really going to matter because majority wins. This process makes no sense to me. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0301e35023f8,36403757FA10,The amount of electoral votes that your state gets depends on your states population and not the size of it. I somewhat understand why they do this but at the same time it doesn't seem very fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+554b7f1a3284,36403757FA10,"Yeah, i know life isn't fair but for something like this that has a possible way of being fair doesn't make sense not to be. Alaska with only 3 electoral votes should be able to have the same amount as california with 55 electoral votes. Since it isn't actually equal like that i feel that they should just choose who wins and becomes president by popular votes. This way would be a lot more fair because it wouldn't actually matter how many people lived in your state, it would just matter how many people voted for which canidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80306634c9ce,36403757FA10,Another reason electoral votes aren't right to me is because if a president wins the popular votes but not the electoral votes then it almost seems likes one of the types of votes is useful ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+88aac0a1c84a,36403757FA10,It seems like this because then he/she may not win and become president even though they won the popular votes. The canidates shouldn't have to rely on 2 different types of votes because obviously one isn't fair. I feel that in a situation like this having popular votes is just a watse of time because it seems that the electoral votes are what matter the most. Not having an equal amount of electoral votes for each state really defeats the purpose. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da377dc20b85,36403757FA10,The voting is done by the party's nominee that then elects a slate of electors to vote for the canidate but the problem is you can't always trust that they will actually vote for the canidate that they're supposed to be voting for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4dff2b0675f2,36403757FA10,"This isn't the only issue, sometimes the voters get confused and accidentally vote for the wrong canidate resulting in more votes for the opposing side. This is a another reason why i feel that the electoral college should be abolished for good. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2d997daf6d7,36403757FA10,"In conclusion, the electoral college is just really not needed in our goverment. It is equal for all states which affects the vote. Also the canidate doesn't win based on only popular votes, they must win they majority of the electoral votes. Lastly but definetly not least, the voting by the slate of electors isn't certain and isn't always accurate. These are some of the main reasons why i feel that the electoral college should be left in the past as an anachronism. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f66b18a5559,364FBA0A27EA,"Driverless cars are another one of the world's technological marvels, that not only take away the prevalent nuisance of driving for long periods of time, but in terms of safety and efficiency, prevail. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+89d0c6805adc,364FBA0A27EA,"When flexibility increases, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e3cf223a3617,364FBA0A27EA,prices decrease ,Claim,Effective,,,
+727f8ebc48a7,364FBA0A27EA,"the safety of consumers is protected, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+acfe4328b666,364FBA0A27EA,then there is no reason that semi-autonomous cars should not replace the commercial vehicles that we see today. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dd5331b8de0b,364FBA0A27EA,"One of the key issues that consumers have today in terms of purchasing a vehicle is the fuel consumption. Sergey Brin, the cofounder of Google, provides evidence that suggests that these vehichles would use around half of the fuel that the vehicles today consume ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fd4bee485ac,364FBA0A27EA,". Not only that, but Brin continues to state that the flexibility is increased as well, surpassing that of a bus. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+26900b60ffc4,364FBA0A27EA,Safety is also increased as a result of these vehicles. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1c4a304d3ec3,364FBA0A27EA,"The fact that these vehicles are semi-autonomous and not completely autonomous enables a human driver to take control whenever they deem it necessary to do so. For example, Google's semi-autonomous creations are ""not truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways and when other complicated traffic issues arise.""
+
+Sensors are what enable these vehicles to perform the tasks that astonish many to this day. Due to the fact that sensors have been used since the 1980s, vast improvements and tests have been conducted over the years to ensure that the safety of the consumer and those around he/she are preserved. The article even states that ""Within 10 years, those sensors [from the 1980s] had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers."" These vehicles allow for the potential decrease in drunk driving, which further emphasizes that safety is not only preserved with semi-autonomous cars, but is heavily increased. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1744feab88c1,364FBA0A27EA,"There is a common misconception that by implementing the production of these vehicles, drivers will ""get bored of waiting for their turn to drive."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bffa821b367d,364FBA0A27EA,"Although this is an issue that many psychologists are considering, some manufacturers are working to eliminate this issue. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8f5317e816a6,364FBA0A27EA,"For example, the article suggests that there are a few car manufacturers that are hoping to rid of this anxiety by bringing in-car diplays and information systems that use heads-up displays. Not only is it a source of entertainment, but also an additional safety feature, which is also a major concern that is alleviated with semi-autonomous cars. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ed0f04929bc,364FBA0A27EA,"The fact that so many automobile companies, such as Tesla, BMW, Nissan, Mercedes-Benz, and Audi, are striving to integrate the idea of semi-autonomous vehicles into their production vehicles, provides even further assurance that the benefits undoubtedly outweigh the harms. Furthermore, this article explicitly states that, as a nation based on progression and safety, semi-autonomous vehicles are the means of achieving the road to a truly autonomous car, and a road to a dramatic increase in safety.        ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f9254699c214,3671DB5110C0,"I think students who have less than a B average should be able to do sports, because doing sports teaches us students responsibility, and self discipline ",Position,Effective,,,
+83da78ca7728,3671DB5110C0,"It might not seem like it to you, but coming from a student who enjoys sports, I know how it makes most students act, and feel. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+59afdc42ef5c,3671DB5110C0,I think you should at least give the students a chance to show you that they would be able to get their grade up so they could play on teams and show their pride for their school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+835344700ed8,3671DB5110C0,"I know I enjoy getting out there, and just playing what I want to play. It motivates me to do my homework, study for tests, focus more in class. That seems to be one of the problems why you don't want students doing sports, because you want them to focus more on their work, well, I'm not sure that would be the best idea. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c71fe4d2cc6,3671DB5110C0,"A lot of students find it irritating that they can't play because of their work, or grades, or something like that. And It makes them not want to do any other work. I'm sorry if this sounds rude, but I am just trying to let you know how the other students would probably feel about this. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a7d4a43feff,3671DB5110C0,I just don't think it's fair that some students wouldn't be able to play because of a grade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd0f06871ed3,3671DB5110C0,"Yes, some students might not be as devoted as other students to get their work done ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d4e9675a3b99,3671DB5110C0,definitely most students would think that if they can't play a sport then they better get their work done. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4ca281e399b2,3671DB5110C0,"It's just depends on the kid, but I know most of us teenagers would definitely try for that spot on the team if we just got the chance! 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9c6ec2b7eef2,36929B945E29,Do you believe in life on Mars? Well I don't and here is why. There is no evidence what so ever of life on Mars. What about the Face on Mars you ask? Well I was hopeing you would ask about that. You see that is what this essay is about. The Face on Mars. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+357768449822,36929B945E29,The Face on Mars is just a naturel land form. From 1976 to 2001 People have been taking pictures of the Face on Mars and every time they took a picture of the Face on Mars they got closer to it and as you look at the pictures you can see that the space in which the Face on Mars is located you can see that it is just a mesa that formed naturely on Mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71cb548db1fe,36929B945E29,So in conclusion the Face on Mars is just a naturel land form created by god when he made the universe. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+31e883a3b888,36929B945E29,"Oh! You are an atheast? Well then looks like we will have to have a nother conversation some time? Well until then, bye. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5df739dac0e2,3697185C117D,"When election day comes and you finally drop your vote in the ballet box after waiting in line for the past hour, you walk away knowing that you have helped the candidate of your choice to rise to the top of the voting pole. Oh how wrong you are. The United States works on a voting system called the Electoral College. ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Lead,Effective,,,
+205238e53970,3697185C117D,"This system has stood the test of time, however it has masked its flaws for long enough. ""60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" (Plumer 9). The people have spoken, ",Position,Effective,,,
+fb4c6d58d218,3697185C117D,"In order to understand the flaws in the electoral college, you need to know what the electoral college is, and how it came to be. ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress."" (Office of the Federal Register 2). This system was created by the founding fathers as a compromise between the congressional vote and the popular vote. However there was a reason for this new, seperated voting system. During their time the founding fathers where among the most educated men in the country. Back then education was not standard and very few people could read or write. The founding fathers did not want uneducated citizens voting on the individual who would lead the country. So they created a system where the uneducated would vote for a group of educated men, who would in turn vote on a president. Thus the electoral college was born. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ef005c748c0,3697185C117D,The founding fathers reasons for forging this system where justified in their day and age. However the world has changed since then. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c14d2a4adf41,3697185C117D,"Another large issue with the electoral college is its favoritism towards larger states. The United States was founded on federalism and democracy, giving power to the people instead of an over-arching central government ruling everything. So any policy that goes against our right to equal say in politics ought to be abbolished, right? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+437cd82c3aa3,3697185C117D,"The number of electors per state under the Electoral College is determined by the number of representatives the state has in congress. ""... one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your senators..."" (Office of the Federal Register 3). Since this system is based on population, bigger states get a emense priority over smaller states. ""The popular vote was very close in Florida [in 2012]; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote , got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in Wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes."" (Posner 21). This means that presidential candidates are going to focus on appealing to larger swing states that have more electoral votes, rather than smaller ones who only provide a few votes. That is not fair now is it? No matter how small a state may be its population still consists of United States' citizens, and they deserve just as much say as a bigger state. After all, that is the concept our country was founded on, equality and freedom. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+60f5d96199fd,3697185C117D,"If the Electoral College does not seem like a flawed system now, allow me to open your eyes to one last variable in our little Electoral equation. The disaster factor. The disaster factor deals with the will of the people, and them doing anything to get what they want. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+07ccbf91e58d,3697185C117D,"""Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that the popular vote for Kennedy would not actually gone to Kennedy.)"" (Plumer 11). That kind of scenario could completely change a close call to a landslide victory! The 1960 election is not the only case of this either. It happened again when Hawaii sent two slates of electors to congress, and in other various cases electors did not vote for their designated candidate. Finally there is the case of the 2000 election, where Al Gore won the popular vote, but lost the Electoral College! If just one person decides to go against the grain, everything gets thrown off. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+30d9adac4396,3697185C117D,"Case and point, the Electoral College is a flawed system. People are educated and can make a smart choice for a president, everyone deserves fair say in the political world, and people need to open their eyes to the corruption that the Electoral College allows for. It may have made sense back in the day of the founding fathers, but it is time to move on and adopt the popular vote system that the people have asked for.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+439a5888d007,36D263A9ECC7,What Would Our Country Yet The World Be Like With Driverless Cars ? Having Driverless Cars Would Have Both Positive And Negative Aspects ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+9b41ffc9b7ac,36D263A9ECC7,Driverless Cars Would Be Positive Aspects Due To The Fact That They Use Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c27f13038bf,36D263A9ECC7,They Offer Far More Flexibility Than A Bus Would ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f0304569512,36D263A9ECC7,The Driverless Cars Can Not Navigate Work Zones Or Go Around Accidents Without A Drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68b9d87c6857,36D263A9ECC7,"That They Use Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis , ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d4db479de4c,36D263A9ECC7,Is Because Who Wants To Keep Causing Global Warming By The Gases That Come Out Of Your Car ? In Order To Even Have Driverless Cars We Have To Have An Earth To Keep Them On . Global Warming Is Basically Over Heating Our Earth And Is Caused By Many Things Including The Gases That Come From Cars . Using Half The Fuel Of Today's Cars For A Far More Better Transportation Sounds Pretty Good To Me . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38a81179a89c,36D263A9ECC7,They Offer Far More Flexiblity Than A Bus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5845676208f1,36D263A9ECC7,Is Because Buses Have Certain Routes And They Hold More Than One Person . I Assume That The Driverless Car Would Be A Mix Of A Bus And A Taxi Not Physically Though . Meaning It Would Pick You Up Wherever You Are Like A Bus And Taxi But It Would Drop You Off At An Exact Location Like A Taxi . Only Its A Far More Upadated Version Meaning Its Takes Half The gass We Use Not & Can Do & Go More Places Then Buses ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3923e6c1bb16,36D263A9ECC7,So If Your Riding In A Driverless Car It Doesnt Know Where Work Sites Would Be Causing Traffic Jams And Maybe Even Crashes . Everyone Wants To Know Whether Their Drive Home Will Be Safe Or Not . Because There Is No Way For You To Inform A Driverless Car That Work Zones Are Ahead If They Dont Have A Driver . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3127227b629e,36D263A9ECC7,A Driverless Car Is Not Able To Go Around Accidents Without A Driver ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64e3e8a88059,36D263A9ECC7,". This Means That The Driverless Car Would Either Do Three Things If Confronted By A Accident . It Would Either Cause A Big Traffic Jam , Cause Another Accident , Or Even Cause Angry Citizens . Everyone Knows An Angry Citize Is Not A Nice Citizen. Then If There Is Already A Traffic Jam Due To The First Accident And A Driverless Care Cant Get Around It , That Would Cause A Huge Traffic Jam . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55373c9bafbc,36D263A9ECC7,All In All Those Were My Reasons Why Driverless Cars Are Both Positive And Negative Aspectd . The Positive Aspects Would Be That It Uses Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis And It Offers far More Flexibility Than A Bus . The Negative Aspects Would Be That They Cant Go Around Work Zones Or Accidents Without A Driver . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2c25fc7e70a2,37019C8C1ECD,"The Electoral College has been here for many years. Over the past years many people think it is unfair to the voters. There are many conflicts that have risen about it. Without a doubt , the Electoral College is unfair and irrational to voters because they voters are basically voting for no reason. The president they want to vote for doesnt count and instead the votes of the Electoral College do , the electors shouldnt be the only people to vote just because they are qualified doesnt mean only their opinion and choice should be heard. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4387e3f82b8a,37019C8C1ECD,a direct election would be much better ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9d7ac8692c39,37019C8C1ECD,everyones votes count ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27bd7a06f99c,37019C8C1ECD,its equal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9345f61d6b1,37019C8C1ECD,"To begin with , when the first Electoral College was made no one really argued about it. But over the many years conflicts have come. People have realized that was is being done istn fair or right. '' At the most basic level , the Electoral College is unfair to voters. Because the winner-take-all system in each state , candidates dont spend time in states they know the have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ''swing'' state''.( source 2, p. 13) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13ffa7516b9e,37019C8C1ECD,Everyone has the right to vote but if their votes dont count whats the point? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4534f835f749,37019C8C1ECD,People should have the right to voice their own opinion and be part of the voting ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6d588dc0daa,37019C8C1ECD,The electors that are chosen have only a little amount of opinions. If the voters would be included there would be a variety of choices of who should win. Every american should be comfortable and certain about who they voted for and if the Electoral College votes contradicts that there can be problems. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e99955733a25,37019C8C1ECD,"Furthermore , In a direct election everyone is treated equally. Unlike , the voting we have now ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0472647826ec,37019C8C1ECD,"''If you lived in Texas , for instance , and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry , you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry''. (source 2, p. 10). Voters cant always control whom their electors vote for but voters sometimes can get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28f192171beb,37019C8C1ECD,Why have so much going on when you can peacefully just count the votes of the voters and electors together? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe638d6c5d1a,37019C8C1ECD,"Yes , they may be the electors and might have more knowledge of whats going on but they are just people too and everyone is created equally so definitely their votes shouldnt be the only ones actually counted. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0df1943942e5,37019C8C1ECD,"Moreover , Bigger states may have a bigger effect on the votes because of their large amount of people voting ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23b6fbef0966,37019C8C1ECD,"By , not making their vote count some people can feel that their voices are not being heard which can lead to in some cases riots and rebellions etc. Voting happens for a reason if gives the world a chance to pick whom they want to see lead them and who they feel like is the right person but in the end if there votes cant count and actually go to the electors limits their power and freedom to speak. '' Voters in presidential elections ae people who want to express a political prefeence rather than people ho think that a single vote may decide an election''.(source 3 , p.23). The Electoral College may have worked in the past but now its not working as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ef7594e1677,37019C8C1ECD,"To conclude , The Electoral College process should be stopped for numerous number of reasons. It limits peoples opinions and people are voting for no reason if they cant pick who they want. Whoever is running for president and everyone who votes for one person shouldnt just be heard from a certai  group of people. Everyones opinion should matter.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7238b486cb5c,3712A5E56380,"The Electoral College has served us for more than a century in determining our nation's new president. ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress,"" states the article ""What Is the Electoral College?"" written by the Office of the Federal Register. This means that we do not vote directly vote for our new president, but instead vote for electors that vote for a candidate running for office. Though many individuals are in favor of keeping the Electoral College, if kept, it will continue to cause problems in our nation. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8750c6d44a1f,3712A5E56380,Our presidential campaign will be much better if we change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Effective,,,
+02f860a46713,3712A5E56380,"To begin with, the Electoral College is the cause for many issues in our nation's presidential campaign. First of all, voters sometimes cannot even control whom their electors vote for. Ergo, one may vote for an elector of our favorite candidate's party, however, we don't know if that elector will go back on his word and vote for another cadidate. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+973752d9292a,3712A5E56380,"The article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" written by Bradford Plumer states, ""The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the sytem allows for much worse. Consider that state legislators are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people"". This means that the people never know if their electors are going to go back on their word and vote for another candidate. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1fdd0480676e,3712A5E56380,"Aside from that, their is the worrying aspect of a tie occurring. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7d12c65af21e,3712A5E56380,"If that were to happen, then the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives. The article The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" written by Bradford Plumer states, ""In 1968, a shift of just 41, 971 votes would have deadlocked the election; In 1976, a tie would have occurred if a mere 5,559 votes in Ohio and 3,687 votes in Hawaii had voted the other way"". This says that if those people had just voted for the opposite person, then there would have been a tie between the two candidates. Yes, those numbers seem large, but in comparison to the number of voters that there were in those years, they're a small fraction of them. This shows how close elections are with the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d47eee755ea,3712A5E56380,"Aside from causing issues in the United States, the Electoral College is extremely unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fb0c421ebd7,3712A5E56380,"The article, ""What Is the Electoral College?"" written by the Office of the Federal Register states, ""Most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate"". That is not fair to other voters who don't vote for the popular candidate in their state; they don't receive any electors. Additionally, most candidates only advertise and visit ""swing"" states. ""Swing"" states are the states that usually determine the outcome of the election. ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" written by Bradford Plumer says, ""During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad"". It's unjustifiable that simply because you have fewer electors in your state, you don't get to watch your candidates campaign. As previously mentioned, each state has a different number of electoral votes. It all depends on the population. For example, Texas, with a huge population has 38 electors, while Maine only has 4. The article, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid out defenses of the system are wrong"" states, ""Beacuse each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters"". Why do some states have more representatives than others just because of their population? It's not fair to the smaller states. It is true that the bigger states have more people in them, needing more representation, however, the smaller states have as much to say as the big ones. ' ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+05296fb22906,3712A5E56380,"To conclude, the Electoral College has caused many disastorous factors in our presidential campaigns. It has caused the wrong president to be elected, and it doesn't give our citizens much of a voice in the election. However, changing the system to popular vote for the president will give people a louder voice in this nation and it will show them that the government cares about their opinion. As the article, ""The Indefesible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid out defenses are wrong"" written by Bradford Plumer states, ""It's officual: The Electoral College is unfaor, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguents against direct elections are spurious at best. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7ccfa56b4629,3716F4794AB4,Online or video conferencing is seen by schools as an option for students to attend classes from home. I Think students would not benefit from attending class at home than they would attending classes at schools. Students would lose the opportunity to communicate with the teachers and other students about the topics they are learning about. Online classes don't keep up with what the student has learned and what the student needs help with ,Lead,Effective,,,
+2f69a1208f50,3716F4794AB4,Online Classes are not a good option for students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+42fe9716a702,3716F4794AB4,they would not be able to communicate and ask questions ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c44c7dc2d671,3716F4794AB4,Students wouldn't take it as serious and cheat ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abc9c83163e7,3716F4794AB4,"students would lose the option of extracurricular activities and to socialize with other students. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+f5c15fb544cb,3716F4794AB4,Online classes are not a good option for students because they cannot communicate and ask questions that could benefit their learning ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fc334a7c78f7,3716F4794AB4,"For example if the classes were not prerecorded or all written down and you had to listen to a teacher talk online, if you miss any information you wouldn't be able to communicate directly to the teacher for some time and wouldn't be able to ask questions until after the lesson. If the class was thought through notes online then students would't be able to communicate with the teacher directly and would have to email them which would take time for them to respond. Students need to think about the information they are learning and not asking questions and making connections, could hurt students when they are taking a test. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a6bb33cd2f16,3716F4794AB4,"
+Students would not take online school as serious as being in a classroom and learning and would probably end up cheating because they are in their own home ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a00836cb006,3716F4794AB4,Online classes wouldn't be able to supervise or restrict students from cheating on an assignment or a test depending on what website or program the students are using to take the class. Students can access any program when they use their own computers unless they are provided b'y the online school. Students could become lazy and skip the lessons because students would feel they have the option because they are in their own home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+290f39006663,3716F4794AB4,Online distance learning also takes away the option for students to socialize with other students and to attend or take extracurricular activities after school that they would normally take if they were at school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+835d25139c03,3716F4794AB4,"Students would not be able to work on any assignments or share any information with other students and would have to work alone. Students would not be able to join school sports, to be part of a team or to just be a little active instead of staying in your house all day, or attend other after school activities that would allow students to socialize and learn about more information that other schools provide after school. Students would lose the opportunity to stay after school with the teacher and ask questions and ask for help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+199b5071b68a,3716F4794AB4,"
+Online distance learning would not benefit students because it takes away the option of direct communication which is key when it comes to learning new curricular. The chance of cheating and laziness increase with taking online classes because its based on your schedule and you learn from your own computer. Also it takes away from socializing with other students and making new friends to spend time with and also losing the option to try after school activities. Also students could have many issues accessing the lessons which would ultimately disrupt their learning. Some schools may offer the option to attend classes while at home but students wouldn't benefit as much as attending classes at school.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+09eb4d2d1b3f,371834E7E1DD,The electoral college has been a part of the united states for many years. The founding fathers were the ones who established it in the constituion ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bc2705de7e56,371834E7E1DD,"The electoral college seems to have worked for all these years , but my opinion on this is that we should change it to electing a president with popular vote. There are many pros and cons to both the electoral college and the popular vote but the positives of the popular vote outweigh the negatives more then the electoral does. ",Position,Effective,,,
+75ead355ef8e,371834E7E1DD,The united states is a democracy so the citizens living here should have the right to vote for the president of the united states ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a5cce58226b1,371834E7E1DD,"With the electoral college the citizens are'nt the ones voting for the president the electors are. In the electoral college the voters are voting for a slate of electors, who then vote for the president. In most cases the elector votes for the candidate that their party wants, in some cases the elector has chosen the oppossing candidate to what his party wants according to the second source. Since the elector is allowed to do this that is one reason why the electoral college is unfair. Popular vote is when the people vote for the candidate they want this is truly what a democracy is when the people choose their representatives. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+32f2c9b08ffb,371834E7E1DD,"The electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system in all the states, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9f9fe4920fce,371834E7E1DD,"because candidates don't spent time in the states they know they will lose in. They only foucus on the states that they know they will win in or of a close chance to the other candidate, because of this there has been times when people would not see the candidates at all or they did'nt get to see a single campaign ad. If there was popular vote then this would not be the case and it would be eliminated, because candidates would have no choice but to put up advertisments all over the country. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+96fea485a653,371834E7E1DD,Even though the popular vote is a good way to go ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b5701da8e3d7,371834E7E1DD,I think that this system of electing president is still not perfect or will never be perfect ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ede2514b5157,371834E7E1DD,The electoral college allowed some of are greatest presidents to win beacuse if they got more electoral votes then popular vote it would'nt matter they will still win. The electoral college also avoids the problem of one candidate not recieving the majority of the votes cast. The electoral college has been in are country for so long and has worked for us well but I still believe that the popular vote can be and  should be used in future elections ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b502f98ae35b,37513D076D09,I think we should make everyone do community service! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+439ad0b53724,37513D076D09,It could let people have a different aspect on the community ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3707f2778a46,37513D076D09,Newton County is not that clean and not everybody is superb in school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da8d1b45e42d,37513D076D09,"First, Newton County has lots of liter! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+edd103a1df69,37513D076D09,We have to do something about it. Certain students should be assigned roads and highways and pick up as much trash as possible every Friday! Then we can pride in of county. It will be so much more delightful. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a656db6db82,37513D076D09,Another idea is to tutor students every other day! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa6091bc1971,37513D076D09,If we have eighth grade students tutor sixth and seventh grade students then hopefully our AP scores will improve ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ceb8c6499cb,37513D076D09,I'm not sure how you could make everyone do community service because some students have after school activities and you can't make them stop for other people. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a46ffed24b30,37771E9C2A8D,"As we all know many people in the United States use phones in their everyday life, either at work or school and even just at home. Our phones are very useful and in my experiences helped me a lot in my time of needs, however many people use it for the wrong reasons. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+be2611a4f72e,37771E9C2A8D,"Almost everyone has phones, and in my opinion phones should not be allowed to be used at school. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ae7ca638596d,37771E9C2A8D,"Why shouldn't they be allowed you ask? Well there are many reasons why they shouldn't be allowed, so let me tell you more. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+471c82403415,37771E9C2A8D,Cell phones nowadays are advanced in technology. Many phones have 3g internet which allows the user to surf the internet almost everywhere they go. What is the problem with that you might ask? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ddc9177904b3,37771E9C2A8D,"Although having internet everywhere you go a nice touch, many people may use it for the wrong reasons. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f451f8bd884,37771E9C2A8D,Students can pretty much go on the internet and look up answers for a test or quiz they didn't study for and I don't know about you but i think that's cheating ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3da16d1bf568,37771E9C2A8D,Another reason would be texting in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bfdb4018a5aa,37771E9C2A8D,"He/she may text his/her friend during class time, therefore distracting her from learning or doing their work. Most cell phones can also download games in which the user can play in class and also distract them from class time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c64dfc9c02af,37771E9C2A8D,As you can see cell phones are ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+97fbbd76acc5,378005A2C405,My opinion on driverless cars is that it is a good development. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+398532648878,378005A2C405,"It can drive for you while you are texting or something so that wouldn't be a problem or not. Also it will have cameras on you to see what is happening in the car as well as out of it. I think it will be more usefull while on long drives and what not.
+
+It alerts you if there is a problem so even if you are distracted by a phone call or something you will be alerted. But i think there should be more tests done on the driverless car such as braking, accelerating, steering, and turn signals. It will have 3-D ssensors outside the car so just in case a animal runs in front of the car it will brake automatically which i think is a good feature. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+235f22ee7d47,378005A2C405,Driverless cars will come either now or later so we should all accept it and consider it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1bfa4b8e700,378005A2C405,People will not like the idea but they probably haven't tried it out either so they have no real argument as to why this is a bad idea. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4244b6ba8821,378005A2C405,This is my opinion on driverless cars.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+befe7b45f8e1,37848FC43982,"Are cars necessary in today's society? Of course they are necessary. Now, are driverless cars necessary ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ecae14a90dbd,37848FC43982,"I would argue that they are not. Cars have been around for about a hundred years, and not once has society put its foot down and demanded a car that drives itself. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+37baecf8d080,37848FC43982,"The driverless cars this article discusses are not actually driverless, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f34d361a0265,37848FC43982,"they are not legal, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+43262bab0466,37848FC43982,there is no telling what future problems may arise. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0137d18866e9,37848FC43982,"Shouldn't a truly driverless car not require a human at all? I personally believe a driverless car should be able to navigate itself without human interferance. If it requires a human, then what is the point of calling it driverless? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9155ac87b7af,37848FC43982,"In fact, all the driverless cars being created right now are designed to notify the driver when it approaches a work zone or accident. So, in case the need to have a human take over arises, an individual would have to be sitting in the drivers seat, paying absolute attention to the road, and await the moment the car will allow the individual to take over. Wouldn't that take away the nejoyment of owning a driverless car? I believe it is even more of a hassle than driving ever would be. A person would have to fight boredom and remain alert while doing nothing other than sitting in the driver seat. To all driverless car companies: driving is paying attention to the road, but the driver is actually engaged, making driving more interesting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bae998b10b3a,37848FC43982,"
+Not only are driverless cars not fully developed, but they are not even legal ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cc272b982237,37848FC43982,"Most states do not allow driverless cars. In fact, most states do not even allow driverlesss cars to be tested on their roads. The article only mentions four places that allow driverless cars, and they only allow limited use. If these cars are not even allowed by most states to out on the road for testing, imagine how long it would take to pass laws to get these cars approved. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4cce4b5d5f8,37848FC43982,A myriad of problems could arise pertaining to driverless cars ,Claim,Effective,,,
+988854c41825,37848FC43982,"The article mentioned a very real problem in driverless cars: if something goes awry and someone in injured, who is at fault? These cases would resort in major courtroom battles between average people and multi-million dollar companies. Another potential problem with driverless cars is the change off between driver and robot. If the car signals the driver and the driver does not respond, then what would the car do? A multitude of problems could appear, and all automakers can do is hope they will be abloe to find solutions to these probelms. To quote the article, ""Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved."" Not only are the companies unsure of what issues will surface, but they are not completely sure they will be able to find solutions. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c12f7eccda9,37848FC43982,"Driving has been central to the American way of life for a large span of time, and if manually driving cars has been working, why change it? Driverless cars have been beiong tested since the 50's, so there clearly is no rush in getting these cars on the street. Also, once these cars are available to the public they will most likely only be accesable to the rich. In time the driverless cars would be more affordable, but the original prices would be high ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+501a39da07a8,37848FC43982,"Driverless cars are getting attention, but as soon as the public knows they will only be for wealthy hands for a bit of time, the excitment will die down. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5700338fc3f8,37848FC43982,"The system works, and it works well, so why change it? Driverless cars may sound high-end and futurisitc, but our cars now do the job well. Plus, there are hazads and roadblocks the driverless cars will have to overcome first. Should we really make state legislatures waste time debating the use of a driverless car that is not completely driverless? Driverless cars have benefits, but they are not street legal. I see no point in spending money for a car that cannot be driven in most streets and is not able to operate without a human there to takeover incase something goes wrong. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+50541ec1f7a9,37A77BEAD718,"""What is the
+
+Electoral college?
+
+In the history, talk electoral college. The electoral college consists of the selection of the eletors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the couting of the electoral votes by congress.
+
+also, the electoral cogelle consists of 538 electors. a majority of 570 electoral votes is requiered to elect the president. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+59468b56d0e2,37A77BEAD718,"According with the test, i agree because all the candidates generally hace responsabilities ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a0bdfa6011d5,37A77BEAD718,"so, they need to demostrate to the people that them can have good ideas for the state. then the people need to have a vote for the best candidate for that can pass to be the new president of the state. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9c90ace3c878,37A77BEAD718,"each candidate have many obligations with the state the obligation president is better the state. one ""evidence is each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c560402bd2a,37A77BEAD718,"in conclusion, i think that is good be president of a state but a president have many obligations that to accomplish.     ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fb89014ef2c7,37DFBAA507EE,The problem with the electoral college is that the people really arent controlling who they vote for. Personally i am in favor of changin the electoral college to popular vote. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+adf7d8946565,37DFBAA507EE,The representatives of the electoral college can basically vote for who ever they want to vote for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b036cdfdd166,37DFBAA507EE,The people only influence the electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+026b140cf808,37DFBAA507EE,The people should have the right to vote for the candidate that they want not the one that some representative in the electoral college chooses. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0958a5a07878,37DFBAA507EE,These are just some reasons why i think the presidential should be replaced by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b71cf589d1b8,37DFBAA507EE,"To begin with, the representatives of the electoral college can basically vote for who ever they want to vote for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+38ba0d109386,37DFBAA507EE,"When a voter places there vote they arent voting for the actual president they are simply voting for the reps of the electoral college. ""The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast."" What this means is that basically the election is based on what they decide not on what the people say ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3da11b04022e,37DFBAA507EE,"Furthermore, the only thing the people do by voting is that they influence the electoral college's decision. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f400cdd9e9c8,37DFBAA507EE,The people dont really get to choose who they believe should be in office. All the electoral college does is get in the way of whom the people choose to be president. The electoral college should be removed and replaced with popular vote. This should take place as soon as possible. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74f3c5b75f7a,37DFBAA507EE,"Lastly, the people should have the right to vote for whom they believe should take office; not for some representative that is gonna choose who ever they want. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f02ea2f1bb2,37DFBAA507EE,"For example, lets say that one votes for obama, they arent really voting for obama they are voting for someone who could pick obama, But the person that they vote for to pick obama could change there mind and vote for the other candidate. So really the peoples vote doesnt even matter. All it does is influence the vote of some representative from the electoral college. I believe that this should be changed to popular vote. In which the people vote for the candidate they want to be president and then all the votes are counted up and compared. Thats the way the presidential should be done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bc37588007c,37DFBAA507EE,This is the best way for the peoples voice to be recognized and it will make a difference.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3a6c81d0c473,37FBA54D3C15,"In this article it asks if you can imagine a world where cars are not needed, I am proud to say I can. In American now more than ever transportation is needed mainly for people to get to work and buy food or other appliances. The people in the word are in need of public transportation more than ever. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9c1b099fe3a1,37FBA54D3C15,"This is why I believe we need to invest in building public infrastructure, public cars, and other forms of transportation. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+ef529c93312d,37FBA54D3C15,the best way to create such a project is to create road systems controlled by magnates and gps computers and creating cars that will run on similar to a train track. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+806f1034d0bd,37FBA54D3C15,This is similar to the bullet trains seen throughout Japan that run on magnates. It would also need to be run by some form of renewable energy sources so the best option is electricity and solar power. It would need a computer capable of driving a car in all conditions and that can travel at high speeds. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+557f8bb0167a,37FBA54D3C15,Would also need a safety feature that allows the driver to take control of the vehicle. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ca168799190,37FBA54D3C15,these systems are put in place people will be able to travel long distances in a short period of time with little to no cost. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7acc27900585,37FBA54D3C15,"Now some will ask ""how will you pay for such a large project?"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4309a4f60584,37FBA54D3C15,"""It's complicated..."". I believe the government should be involved in building this form of public transportation. The way I invision us paying for this is and expansion on estate tax. the estate tax is a tax on a persons inheritance over 10 million dollars and in America this is set at around 40%. This means someone who inherited 10 million and one dollars would pay a tax of 40¢. If we expand on this tax and other taxes similar to this we could no only fund our expansion on public infrastructure but also pay for other extraordinary things such as tuition free college education. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fa3d38fb2734,37FBA54D3C15,companies that want to advance this milestones in engineering can help in the innovation process. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d18ff27b5702,37FBA54D3C15,these companies are import in the completion aspect and are needed to enhance the innovation. I'm not saying the government should souly control the means of production of thes automated vehicles it is just practical that it be envolved in the production. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d0a3b02546dc,37FBA54D3C15,my belief is that America needs to evolve. The people are in need of better public transportation and infrastructure. If we can create vehicles that can transport people at high speed and wove our transportation issues in America. We can pay for it and create with the help of tax payer dollars and companies willing to work with the government. If we follow the basic outline put forward and expand upon it we can achieve many things and creat many things the people of America and the world need. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+af5671432cd3,37FDBF9C7EE7,I think we should be aloud to use cell phones during free periods ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47fa7e6c8e9c,37FDBF9C7EE7,Technology is part of the future and we will use it when we are older. It will help us become adults ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7435444c4521,37FDBF9C7EE7,We can also keep up with our friends and our parents can call to tell us if there is a problem. Kids already use them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+557af1648f72,37FDBF9C7EE7,"
+But the cell phones should be shut off during class to stop distractions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a709e92cbfd,37FDBF9C7EE7,We all need to face it we will all be using technology in the future. Most of our jobs will require a computer or cell phone. Why not let us express our freedom. If you tell them they cant use there cell phones they will want to use them and if you tell them they can they will think your cool and wont argue with you as much. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b33ecbcd79b9,37FDBF9C7EE7,Another reason cell phones should be shut off during class is because the kids could text each other the answers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb6118bb7c90,37FDBF9C7EE7,"Let us express our freedom. If teachers can use them let us so we our all equal, and we don't look down on each other. I agree There has to be rules but we also should be aloud freedom. If we couldn't have phones at school how are we supposed to call our parents to come and pick us up. Or if school gets canceled how are we supposed to call them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+be7f132d04d0,38068DC463D0,Looking at driverless cars may seem a bit odd. What is a car that you don't even really have to drive? That's not a car ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a5e1e1263353,38068DC463D0,"Although, I am claiming to be on both sides of this situation, it may be that I would never purchase this type of car ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+b68ba3cae633,38068DC463D0,"SInce these cars have the name of driverless cars, people may not take these seriously. It does state in the article that the car does alert the driver of some things. But if you really look into it, what happens if the car glitches and doesn't alert the driver? What then? This problem may cause an accident and prohibit the driver of a bigger chance of harm. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe75890e4a85,38068DC463D0,"Driverless cars may seem fun, which I have never actually been in one nor seen one, but not having to drive seems pretty relaxing, even though you hold the wheel ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d52188439d63,38068DC463D0,It may also has the downs. Let's say that somone is on their way to the hospital rushing for a loved one who is terribly hurt. How does the driverless car react? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fad7d6778cb0,38068DC463D0,"There's a whole bunch of questions, but the actual question is, is it safe for everyone to handle and drive? 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+53c9ec3ababe,38068DC463D0,having one of these may be expensive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c1aa9308c22,38068DC463D0,"as much as gas is, or parts to your normal car are, or even the inside areas, how much will it cost to fix the sensors or even if the driverless car has gas? These things may be a lot harder to pay for since it's all practically technology. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb78a7b1c3d4,38068DC463D0,I do not recomend these types of cars to anyone simply for my opinion.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c17e6f8177a,38287E1FD26F,"
+I strongly believe that the electoral college is the right way to go. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dc4dccfddbe8,38287E1FD26F,reason I feel this way is because of the electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b28f3f085400,38287E1FD26F,our founding fathers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf0fd47f061e,38287E1FD26F,", political parties. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9221b7d6e34d,38287E1FD26F,I like that three electors is representing a state. I believe that the electors know more about the government than regular people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9ad45b32f3d,38287E1FD26F,I want someone that knows what they are doing when they go to represent our state! There are 538 electors that vote for president and vice president but there only has to be 270 votes required to elect the president or vice president. Congress has to count the votes in the same place that the electors voted in. Sometimes I don't agree with the president that they picked but I'm glad that honest people count the votes. When the votes are finished and the winner's name is called out the losers revive a certificate of ascertainment. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bb9c7f3e3d6,38287E1FD26F,Also a big part of me wants to keep the electoral college is because of our founding fathers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+479d03001316,38287E1FD26F,"They put in so much work to help us. I would hate for all there hard work to go to waste. Also they had to put their lives on the line to help crate it. They broke so many laws  for us! Also think about not only did they put their lives in danger but their families life at risk! To me that took a strong amount of courage! I'm honored to talk about our founding farther any time! In the 23 amendment our founding fathers wrote the district of Columbia is allowed three electors and for them to be treated like a state! Also our founding fathers wrote that only citizens that are qualified to vote! Key word here people ''Qualified!'' As long as everyone remembers that key word then, we all should be fine! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e885cfc2e8ce,38287E1FD26F,"A lot of people hate political parties but, I like them ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fb9d8d2c4b80,38287E1FD26F,"Just think about when you were in school and you wanted to be class president so bad. The people who voted for you is like your political party. I know I loved my political party because they helped me win! Your political party helps come up with all kinds of cool ideas to get people to vote for you. Like when I was running for class president my political party baked cookies, passed out fliers and, help me wright my speech! That's just like when you run for president and vice president. Except I don't think they really pass out cookies when you run to be the real deal president! I know I would vote for the president if he or she gave me a cookie! Ha ha ha ha I crack myself up but it's the truth! Hint Hint for the next election I better be at the top of the list if someone decides to give out cookies! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+224c7d8b5a47,38287E1FD26F,"I agree with the Electoral College because I want what's best for my state, family and, friends!    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a5fe9aa455d,3856538E4B2D,I would like to keep the Electoral College because i think it works out better than the popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+352f2e70dbe5,3856538E4B2D,If we had the popular vote then there would be an unfair voting cast and we would be introuble. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2b324ef6744,3856538E4B2D,they would abuse the voting if it was by popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b69a9da66751,3856538E4B2D,plus it only requires 270 electoral votes to elect the president and theres 538 electors ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adbe6e4ac42d,3856538E4B2D,In some states they have only a limited number of electors depending on how big or small the state is. Also the winner takes all system should go with both presidents because they both worked hard to get there and shouldnt just be left out they should seperate the electors evenly some people cant become the president or vice president so they shouldnt leave out the vice president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b7b3374cd29d,3856538E4B2D,It states in the article that over 60 pecent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4a79e3d02b0,3856538E4B2D,"Also it says under nthe electoral college system, votes dont vote for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bfffd49c4e1b,3856538E4B2D,Theres also rumors of the Electoral College like people calling it the disaster factor because people say it cause to much drama and is risky. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91133732454b,3856538E4B2D,I understand if there was a tie in the Electoral vote then it would be all up to the house of representatives where state delegations vote on the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1bf101cec7f,3856538E4B2D,It should just be up to the citizens to chose who runs for president so that way there isnt such big arguments over who became president. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+925a1e2b38e2,387867C1B5CE,"People are saying there's a face on mars. This is true, people are also questioning if aliens had put it there, it may just be a historical formation on the earth, reasearches believe it may just be a formation and not created by aliens. People have named this formation the ""Face on Mars"" it has become to be a very popular sight that people are wanting to see more and more of it. This is so popular that it has been in ""Hollywood films, appearded in books, magizines, and even talk shows."" 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+90ada98716cc,387867C1B5CE,"Researchers found this figure on the planet mars, they found this not only weird but very interseting. They thought lets do more research to find out what actually caused this formation on mars. Reasearchers thought at first that aliens had put this figure on the planet because it is a figure of a human face. They took big cameras up into mars and sized the figure so large so they could get closer pictures of the image. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4fd27090c03,387867C1B5CE,"The more research the reasearchers did the more facts they found. They had many sightings like this before and they figured maybe a alien did not put that figure on mars. Reasearchers may have thought this because there had been many different formations on earths surface, it was most likely caused by earths erosion or natural features. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ea4933e8505,387867C1B5CE,"They compare some ideas to it just like the ""Middle Butte in the snake river of Idaho."" There had never been sightings of aliens before why would there be now. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c23b6d8d965,387867C1B5CE,"The people that work for NASA believe that it most likely ended up being a formation in mars because of the research everyone has done they have come to find that there are most likely no aliens up on mars. They say this because they went back up and looked some more around the area where the face was found to see if there was a ""alien monument."" Come to find out there was no alien monument around or even located on mars so aliens did not cause this ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b445d3a5804,387867C1B5CE,"Researchers believe that this was just a normal formation from the planet mars that just occured, but did people? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a9b89a287ca,387867C1B5CE,When this all came to take place the first day they let the news out it went viral. People were wanting to know what caused this and how was this caused. When they realesed the news from the NASA they thought the same thing well it had to be aliens. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8fa61348a0f5,387867C1B5CE,After all this was no formation by aliens it was simply a formation from the planet itself. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b9b483790932,387867C1B5CE,"After all of this was figured out what really caused it, it went more viral than it was before. It was more popular because everyone was talking about it and it occured in Hollywood movies,Books and even talk shows. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dd9681afb8c3,387867C1B5CE,People were wanting to still believe that no landform can just make something like this. They thought how could this be. The planets have their wonders and wow's you just have to let the formations take place and see what amazing things can be done. Also have patience to see what really happened to the item that was found. You might just be amazed for once. Most don't think there could be such amazing feautures on the planets. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8773e35c6619,38867A20B018,So we come here to discuss a topic. A very intresting one if you say. This topic has history to it and some people don't like this topic. Some people don't like this topic because of the way it works. This thing i'm talking about is the Electoral College. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6b22104c369b,38867A20B018,I personally don't like this thing. that is because it is so outdated and unfair. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+007c6b649ea3,38867A20B018,"Look at the 2000 election. Al Gore, an amazing guy, ""had more individual votes then George w. Bush."" This guy would of been a great president but  ""Bush won the election, receiving 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f77ecc070462,38867A20B018,"I believed this was unfair because one person could of one but another man had got more ""popularity"" votes and won. Now tell me why that is fair? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ca367cc295c0,38867A20B018,"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualifed citizens."" This means that the people of the state can vote buts it really not going to count. These people want a good president and it happened in 2012. Alot of Southern states like Mitt Romney and they voted for him. He got alot of votes and was beating Obama. But Obama got""61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percentpf the votes for Romney."" Romney had change in his eyes and the Electoral College didnt care and took that away from him. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d9281c6f24ac,38867A20B018,"To conclude this, the Electoral College is unfair. They take people's chances to change this country and do new things for us. If we had Mitt Romney, America might of had better imployment and a better system. We would of probulay had more money and had a better chance of going to college. But the Electoral College is unfair and had to take that away from Mitt and gave it to Obama. It's so outdated and unfair. For God's sake, its from 1700's! We need to get a better system of voting next time or people or just stop going to vote because they will know thay their votes mean nothing to the college and they will stop. If these people stop voting.... then we better have a backup plan to restore the country.                    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5730dca50b22,389471556AB9,Do you think driverless cars are better than regular cars ? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+423fd3d161c4,389471556AB9,If you ask me i think regular cars are better. I also think driverless cars are dangerous. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ef5a2194a48,389471556AB9,My first reason i think regular cars are better is because when driving a regular car you have to pay attention. If your car drive by itself you can lose focus and forget where you was trying to go. Its say in paragraph nine that in five different states its illegal to test computer driven cars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+850f45dbfdc2,389471556AB9,i like regular cars because it keeps people active. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cad8a6c4b50c,389471556AB9,I think driverless cars are dangerous because it has way more technolgy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+285fafeec112,389471556AB9,If driving and you car glitch and brake on it on it may cause accident. Another reason i think its dangerous is because with all that technolgy it can cause a easy fire. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1056b6bd88e4,389471556AB9,"Those are my reasons i think regular cars are better, and driverless cars useless if you still have to put gas in it. Now write me a essay on if you think driverless cars are better then regular cars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b4f1368a5797,38B237B2F190,"In the current era, you never have to step foot in a public school ever again. Yes, you are still lawfully required to complete the majority of your secondary education, but the ever growing access to laptops and other electronic devices has introduced a new method for students to earn their highschool diplomas ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c78701bcfdc0,38B237B2F190,"Some school districts now permit their students to learn and participate in class via internet or video conference. While this innovation may seem like a peek into the future of American schools, it is not without its share of faults. ",Position,Effective,,,
+9814ec16581a,38B237B2F190,Allowing students to take courses online takes away from school's greater lessons ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3f5ff9484dc2,38B237B2F190,limits the social interaction that teens crave ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ed6c4ee5bf2e,38B237B2F190,despite the argument that it will help students keep on top of their studies in typically absent-causing. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7cef55d63f5b,38B237B2F190,"After every school year, students are expected to show mastery of the cirriculums in each of their core classes. What the final exams fail to measure, however, are the other critical life skills that students obtain in the classroom. For example, group projects do more for the individual than teach them a bunch of facts and figures. They also simulate the level of collaboration students will use regularly as future members of the workforce. Similarly, assigning nightly homework goes deeper than the teacher's desire to keep their pupils busy, as learning to balance piles of graded assignments is an effective way to teach lessons about time management. Taking online classes will enact these same skills to an extent, though the lack of classmates combined with a more flexible schedule puts students in a bit of a bubble. In other words, school becomes less about practical application and focuses significantly more on pure academic knowledg ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a622b2c20c48,38B237B2F190,"While online classes accomplish the same goal in their cirriculums, they fall terribly short in teaching students other important life skills. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+ddac5ee4bae6,38B237B2F190,"social skills, much like life skills, have their place in students' daily lives as well. It might not feel like it when teachers are constantly telling their classes to ""quiet down"" and ""focus on their assignments"", but the adults within the school building are just as aware of the psychological and emotional benefits of social interaction as teens. Therefore, students attending traditional public schools are alotted time, such as lunch or study hall, to hang out with friends and strengthen their interpersonal relationships. It is for these same reasons that most schools host memorable events outside of their eight-hour days for students to enjoy. Proms, talent shows, sporting events, and other staples of American high school serve no other purpose than providing social entertainment and positive experiences. On the other hand, online classes force students to spend countless hours sitting behind a computer screen, completely separated from their peers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a37a660364fe,38B237B2F190,"Online classes, with their isolated environment, cause students to lack the same interaction and attention they recieve at school everyday. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3c5563398b85,38B237B2F190,"Of course, schools would not offer their students online classes if it came with zero benefits. There is a strong arguement to be made in favor of virtual schooling when students are abesent for an extended period of time. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+62c6cf7c03ca,38B237B2F190,"When faced with extreme situations, like severe illness or family emergencies, students must also stress over catching up on their work upon returning to school. Online classes would allow these students to complete assignments and learn course material outside of the classroom. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c4930e97fc1,38B237B2F190,"Nonetheless, this peace of mind is only applicable if the student is mentally and/or physically capable to do schoolwork while enduring such a taxing hardship. Online classes may come in handy when students would usually miss school, even the pros are of this school system are laced with cons. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6ddb4c2260ea,38B237B2F190,"The debate of online classes in place of traditional schooling is a complicated one. Allowing students to complete their academic career without actually attending school may help keep them on track, as they could continue to learn in situations that would otherwise require an absence, but at what price? Online classes cause students to miss out on important life lessons and practical skills, such as collaboration and time management, due the the structure of the assignments. Additionally, students will have less opportunites to interact with their peers and create long-lasting memories at school-sponsered events. For now, it is in the best interest of the children and the future society to keep students in the classroom. Allowing students to take courses online takes away from school's greater lessons and limits the social interaction that teens crave, despite the argument that it will help students keep on top of their studies in absent-causing situations.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+036b5a36abd3,38B7875D420E,"Technology has a greater, more widespread impact on various facets of daily life than ever before. New technological developments now aid in routine, everyday tasks such as mail delivery, shopping, and even vacuuming the floor. One extremely common routine that technology is aiding in secondary schooling. In fact, many public and private schools at all levels are beginning to offer distance learning, or non-classroom settings such as virtual classes and video conferences that cover the same curriculum that a traditional classroom would ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f807c11f3d3f,38B7875D420E,Students would benefit from from distance learning through online classrooms or video conferencing ,Position,Effective,,,
+3f87992b3465,38B7875D420E,offer remedies to personal issues that stem from classroom learning ,Claim,Effective,,,
+960dbdcfaf51,38B7875D420E,provide an easier alternative for those who may have difficulty getting to school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a8e34f292981,38B7875D420E,it can allow students to work at their own pace instead of the pace dictated by a classroom setting. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4249371b8bed,38B7875D420E,A benefit of schooling through distance learning can be seen in those with personal issues that stem from or are triggered by a traditional classroom. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9964bb895e8a,38B7875D420E,"For example, many students have challenges such as social anxiety, ADD, or Asperger's which can be affected by large crowds or groups of people, aspects that a standard classroom offers. These large gatherings may make those affected very anxious or nervous, unable to focus, or susceptible to emotional or verbal outbursts. By moving the classroom to the home via distance learning, many of these problems brought on by large gatherings are eliminated because the student is now in the comfort of their own home, family, and possibly a couple other students, yet they are still obtaining the same education and life skills that a classroom would offer. In fact, they may even learn quicker and more successfully because of the elimination of these problems. These people with social disabilities would benefit from distance learning because it would resolve problems that occur at school which possibly hinder their learning. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a2dddb37ee5,38B7875D420E,Another benefit that distance learning has over traditional classroom settings is the elimination of difficulties stemmed from getting to and from schools that may affect the students' education or daily lives. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dba2ed82aaf6,38B7875D420E,"This benefit can be seen in rural areas of the country where the commute to school in the nearest city may be as much as fifty miles, with the added time of bus stops for every student who lives along the way. In these cases, the school day may only be seven hours, but a commute of up to ninety minutes in each direction can make school a time commitment of as much as ten hours every day, not to mention extracurricular activities that can take up even more time.
+
+This is a serious burden on the daily lives of the students, especially with the need to complete homework and even just relax. Additionally, in some places, such as the Mid-Atlantic, one snowstorm of twenty inches or so can close schools for a week or more due to the lack of equipment to handle those occasional storms. This lost time can limit and hinder students' education simply because they are unable to get to school. Distance learning, so long as power is on, can heavily limit or even eliminate the impacts of such weather events or long commutes by taking away the commuting aspect of school so that the students can stick to the ideal schedule to maximize their education. Distance learning benefits these groups of people by providing an efficient and routine schedule that students can maximize their education on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+76d967a49d7f,38B7875D420E,A third positive outcome of distance learning is the allowance for students taking part in these programs to work at their own pace. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2c54387484e7,38B7875D420E,"With traditional schooling methods, students are placed in classes of as many as thirty peers all trying to obtain the same education and lesson within the time constraints of the class. As with any large group of adolescents, some students will quickly catch on, while some will take longer to grasp the material. However, when one teacher is controlling a classroom of thirty different learning paces, they have to attempt to find a happy medium to teach the curriculum, and they are additionally limited to the constraint of a 45- to ninety-minute class period. This leaves the quicker students bored and unsatisfied while the slower students are left to struggle to continue to catch up to the teacher's pace. This issue is especially prevalent in an AP or college level class, where there is a lot of material thrown at the students at once. With distance learning, however, students have the benefit of learning at their own pace. Because of the eternal availability of the internet and email as well as abundant resources both in virtual classrooms and on the web, students are able to quickly tackle the subjects that come easy to them while also able to slow down, ask questions, and get additional help on topics that they struggle on. By not having to conform to a teacher's pace, students are more likely to succeed at their own pace, which is encouraged through distance learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cca0a771db7a,38B7875D420E,"Traditional classroom learning may be what nearly everyone in the country is used to, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dc91008a6a0c,38B7875D420E,"but what may come easy or familiar to one person may not always be easy to another person. A good alternative to many of the problems brought about by a standard classroom setting is the development of distance learning based on new technology, ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+27af2a488336,38B7875D420E,"Among the benefits it has are provision of a more comfortable environment for students with learning or other disabilities, elimination of problems brought on by long or challenging commutes to school, and the ability for students to learn at their own pace to maximize their understanding of the material, all while learning the same subjects they would learn in a classroom All in all, while classroom learning has proven to be effective in years past, there are many additional benefits of distance learning, and because of this, it can be expected to expand further in the coming years.        ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+14508d0f3a88,38C0F11C9F00,The Face on Mar couldn't been made by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c15a17125930,38C0F11C9F00,"The monument was another natural formation. It is stated in the fourth passage, that it is giving an illusion to the shadows and making it look like it has eyes, nose, and a mouth."" Evidence say in the fifth passage say that NASA would wather hide, and say that conspiracy theorists. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa8f30a2e4be,38C0F11C9F00,The monument has properties tht make it look like is has a natural human face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ddf70e897572,38C0F11C9F00,"The shadows give it a 3D effect to look like a person from Earth. to eally see that it is not a face you will need to focuse on the picture, to not let the shadow make you think it is a face. The face is only a illusion of the mind, some people say the face looks like a Egyptian Pharaoh. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10e25601233a,38C0F11C9F00,NASA thinks that if there were a alien civilization on Mars that it would be a popularity increase for the big red planet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00feb2172d4b,38C0F11C9F00,"People that still think that their was life on Mars defend by saying that it would help the budget for themselves. The Face on Mars became popular and started to get on talk show, radios, and magazines. Soon NASA wanted to let the conspircy take place and leave the Face alone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c96f1b1858dc,38C0F11C9F00,The Face of Mars could have been made by alien because of the unexplainable things on Earth itself. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f4157a497457,38C0F11C9F00,"In the last passage it states that i could have been made bye aliens. Compared to all of the things on Earth. It could be a possiblity of aliens making the Face on Mars. For example, in the last passage it says that Garvins say, ""That it slike the lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on a Mars."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c886f7695149,38C0F11C9F00,"In conclusion, the Face on Mars was not created by aliens, and there for the case of the Face on Mars was a natural monument after all. It compared to West America for all of the weird thing that they have. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1535efd6cb1b,38D227AB68A0,I personally do not agree with the choice you are considering. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e2b9c5154591,38D227AB68A0,Sports and other activities are very important to some and most students ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08e2da025e0f,38D227AB68A0,These activities allow them to have a chance to relieve the stress that school has caused them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d166bdb4001,38D227AB68A0,"If students where told that they wouldn't be able to have the rights in participating, unless they have a B average or higher, this would cause them nothing but more stress than what they already have. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+186e4e28a36f,38D227AB68A0,Some students rely on sports to keep them motivated. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9df837d5e11c,38D227AB68A0,"With no sports or other activities students grades could lower past a C average.
+
+Also, you must put into consideration that if the majority of students have a grade of C average.
+
+Some may not be able to improve their grades.
+
+They may already be trying as hard as they can.
+
+If so, it would become unfair for those students to not be able to participate in sports. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf8709abdb08,38D227AB68A0,"Having these activities open to all students even if they have a C average or a B average, could also help improve their grades. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b4eb7d887ce,38D227AB68A0,"Sports and other activities include teamwork, motivation, and consequences.
+
+These 3 things are not only needed to help students achieve in sports but to achieve in school too.
+
+In the classroom, students need to know how to use teamwork and motivation.
+
+This will allow them to use teamwork in groups to help improve ones grade.
+
+And motivation will cause one to achieve their work assignments.
+
+And having these available to them, they will know the consequences of not using them correctly.
+
+These will result in bringing students grades up.
+
+Making you happy with their grades and them happy being able to still participate in sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bcec9d6ef5d9,38EEEB5BC11C,You are deciding whether to make students perform community service or not. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d2c26d692b72,38EEEB5BC11C,In my opinion i think that students should do community service for many reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3b20dcc90109,38EEEB5BC11C,One reason is that the community is being littered too much and we need people to clean that up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ad6ac120080,38EEEB5BC11C,"I understand why people may not want to do community service, because they have there own life to take care not pick up after other humans. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+635b61194ab7,38EEEB5BC11C,"Well to fix that problem, the service should be done in the morning where students have nothing to do, and in the weekends when they have no school. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f890ea13fa15,38EEEB5BC11C,I also think that while the students are doing the service they should have water breaks and other things to keep them not tired. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+159069acb80a,38EEEB5BC11C,"The students could the service one weekend and another group does the service another weekend, so the students wont get worn out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b93bf49e1ed,38EEEB5BC11C,"Another good reason why the students should do community service is because some children don't get enough education at school, so some students can be chosen to tutor those children in need of help. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+75ada472d390,38EEEB5BC11C,"The students schedule should not be that hard , it should be once a week for two months. The other days that are left in the week can be done by another student. Each student is basically helping out , students help a lot by just tutoring a child for at least half an hour. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c40fc1579b0,38EEEB5BC11C,"Our community can be much better if the students help out. Principle all i am saying is that community service is good for the community , but i am also saying that if the students do get community service, not to push them too hard. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5901a0dbf1d9,38F0C2290179,I think we should change the election by popular vote ,Position,Effective,,,
+9c2fdb8b1078,38F0C2290179,because with the electoral college not everyone is getting to vote like they should be doing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7de990be5681,38F0C2290179,"The Electoral College selects the electors, so the canadates are gonna choose the electors that have things in common with them so they win the election. Voters vote for a slate of electors, they dont get to vote for President. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d258208bc946,38F0C2290179,The Electoral College is unfair ,Claim,Effective,,,
+082ba41d49bf,38F0C2290179,because the winner-take-all system makes it so candidates don't spend time in the states they know their not gonna win. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors and you need at least 270 votes to elect the President. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+048708a1e424,38F0C2290179,"The Electoral College process is so much more complicated and long than popular vote, so why do we still use the Electoral College? We shouldn't. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+37768a353e0c,38F0C2290179,Im not the only one that thinks this way ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+83b86affdc1e,38F0C2290179,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and so many more people think that we should abolish the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a0b9a757364,390900163076,"If I was a scientist on Mars with somone who thought the face was formed by aliens, I think I would disagree. I would disagree because aliens are not real and why would they just made a radom face into the ground. I would say that the land in that area is just deformed ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+af45cc292893,390900163076,"I think that it is just Mother Nature, she put it like that, that spot is a natural landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ed158aea9432,390900163076,People might think that aiens are real but that saying is just a myth that some people that are nerds will belive ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+18e3335df38a,390900163076,"I use to think they were real and then I figured out they weren't. If they was real then when people or NASA went to a planet or just into space, why didn't those people every see them? If they did exist why wouldn't people take pictures when they were in space of the aliens? Why don't aliens exist? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e3c41994248,390900163076,If aliens do exist do you think they would attack you if they saw you? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3660a5f6517c,390900163076,I would think that aliens would be on earth. What would aliens be like if they were on earth? would the Earth still be the same if they was on Earth. Who would controll them if the did exist. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bafe6a64eac5,390900163076,"Would aliens be in a zoo, becuse they are a weird like creture/human ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e22418947116,390900163076,people should know that akiens aren't real becuase if they were they would be on earth and people would take pictures and other things. Some could kill you other could hurt you or do other horrible things to you ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21e0a3581d8c,390900163076,That face on the ground was a natural landform it was not formed by aliens.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a00de3c2a19f,391455AC0C39,The Electoral College is a really good process that I think they should keep. This Electoral college was found by the founding fathers and it is used so that the citizens could vote and the congress. The citizens get to have the right to vote on who they want to be presidant. After everyone voted the votes are counted up in each state and it shows which states voted for different people. The congress have a meeting of the electors and get to all vote. All votes for the congress are counted out seperatly then citizens. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3dbec58dc933,391455AC0C39,This is a the start of why I think Electoral College is fair and equal all around. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+22844ee60d56,391455AC0C39,In order for the Electoral College to elect a presidant they need 270 votes out of 538 Electors. Each state or country has electors in them. The candidates running for presidant have their own electors. Every 4 years a presidential election is held at the same time on tuesday after the first monday of novemeber. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f610ee7fd2e,391455AC0C39,When voting for the candidates you are basically voting for the candidates electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bccd49090f53,391455AC0C39,"After voting in the election the governor makes a ""Certificate of Ascertainment,"" which is the list of the candidates who ran for presidant. Also, it shows who the winning candidate is in each state. Lastly the certificate is sent to the states congress to keep for records. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce1c99943670,391455AC0C39,There are mainly 5 reasons in why the Electoral College should stay ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+679037b6faac,391455AC0C39,"First is the Certainty of Outcome which shows that there cant be a dispute because it is based on popular vote. The next reason is Everyone is Presidant, this means that the presidential candidate has trans-regional appeal. Another reason is Swing Sates which is the winner take all method. They are usually whatching campaigns and really listen to the other candidates, thoses poeple are usually thoughtfull voters. The next great reason is Big States, this shows if you win a big state then you win more electoral votes and each big state has more electoral votes. The last reason is Avoid Run Off Elections, this avoids the problem of no candidates recieves a majority of the votes in the east ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fe9f4e8ab22,391455AC0C39,Their are alot of great reasonings about electoral college but there are some bad reasonings to ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0060aead4e77,391455AC0C39,"Voters dont vote for the presidant when they vote, they vote for the elcectors and the electors vote for the presidant. This can mean that even if you voted for the specific presidant your vote shows you voted for the 30 or so congress people voting for presidant. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+144ead4c1b3b,391455AC0C39,"What if there was a tie in the electoral vote then the election would be for the House of Representitves where they vote for presidant. The 55 representitive votes are equal to 35 million voters. This shows that the electoral college can be bad for the voters. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cac50c6426d3,391455AC0C39,After reading the article and going over it I believe that the Electoral College is a great idea. There are many great things about but then there are things that you dislike about it. Not everything can be perfect but the Electoral College is trying to get that way. The presidant is still getting voted every 4 years and hopefully it stays like that for a very long time. Those were all my reasons on why I thought the Electoral College is the right way to go.            ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+48aa518fc72d,393BDF8C7897,Policy one is the right one to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+77eb873e4ca3,393BDF8C7897,because you might have miss the bus what are you going to do if you don't have a phone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2ff404186ce,393BDF8C7897,And if you don't get them out thatcher should not be able to take them from you and think that should be a rule. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a99cc7c349f9,393BDF8C7897,If you forget your work at home what are you going to use to call you parent with? Or you are sick and you need to go home. plus it cant hurt some one or yourself so I think it is dumb that you can not bring a phone to school and that's why I think its dumb that you can not bring a phone to your school if you have them turn down and if do not have them out in class and if you do bring them to school they need to give them back to you at the end of class or at the end of the day . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25b9c05b2504,39568660BDA5,"I dont think that the electoral college should decide the president of the united states, i think that the overall vote of the americans should determine the president of the unites states. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7983c1ed8b34,39568660BDA5,why would they even have a popular vote if there not gonna go by it? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2288cf7a46f4,39568660BDA5,"Also the popular vote has mostly everyone in the united states voting on it, the electoral vote has only a couple people, they are way outnumbered ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+607dc24d28ee,39568660BDA5,And lastly its not fair at all to the american people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b108222750e9,39568660BDA5,"Firstly, why would you want the whole united states of america to vote on something if what they vote, and what they say isnt being heard. Whats the point of it? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+154a00dc7c10,39568660BDA5,"in my opinion what the people say how the president should be determined. If they want it any other way why would they not have changed it by now? no one really likes having to take time out of there day to go vote, if there votes arnt even going to be seen, or heard by people? whats the point of making them do that? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84b088ca5db1,39568660BDA5,"Secondly, the united states has billions of people in it, and the electoral college only has a few people in it. You think thats very fair to anybody ??? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+330e95f35577,39568660BDA5,"everyone votes, results are in, you think you have a winner, then all of a sudden theres no winner, you know why? because of the electoral college!!! these extra people make the final decision and thats not right. If thats the case of it to me it seems like they have the answers, and no one can decide but them, so why even have a vote? its really pointless the author states that most states like the idea that the overall vote wins, theres only a couple that dont like this idea. So by rule they should just make it the popular vote wins the election, and thats who tthe president becomes. Why they havnt done it? I have no idea! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d351f2c3398f,39568660BDA5,And my final reason of why popular votes should just determine who wins is because they go out and vote and they feel like it doesnt matter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7941605493b5,39568660BDA5,"Because the electoral college decides then the united states gets really mad when they vote and the popular vote doesnt win! Of course they get mad, who wouldnt? there votes mean nothing at all. And they need to change this electoral college policy, more people want it gone thaen the people that dont. And thats mostly why america is usually never satisfied with the president of the unites states. Because of the fact that the united states didnt put them and the votes first, they put the electoral college ahead and thats not how it needs to be!!! They should make a vote for the united states saying that who wants to keep the electoral college and who doesnt! i bet that they will say that they want it gone. Because its already been voted out before so why will they keep something that no one is satisfied, or pleased with? Hopefully they will see this soon enough!!! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7665adb1ac42,39568660BDA5,"In conclusion, this electoral college stuff just needs to go, and the people need to be happy with there vote that they want, and they should be! they have been living in the state there whole life, if not most of it. And they want to make sure that someone they like, and know and trust will be there leader and wont let them down, and will change the problems that are in america. So go ahead and keep the electoral college even if barely any one likes it. Cause that doesnt make any sesnse!!!! the people need to vote on there counties leader not a few people for each state, and or place. its not right, and no one really likes it. So this should be a change in America!!!!!!!!!!!!!!            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+91d90a22d94b,3978B5847C18,"While I normally don't have any complaints, and being the person I am not many things ""bug me"", but I recently found that I disagree with a certain argument. And while it is near voting times, I believed it's best for me to send you my side on this continuous debate to change your mind on the matter. The electoral college has had its share of arguments and I would like to make my side seen knowing I have quite a bit of logical arguments. Please read with an open mind. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+bba2e9849f4d,3978B5847C18,"The electoral college is unfair in many ways, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d7d68fa0127b,3978B5847C18,"The electoral college gives an easier way to get  tie, and although a tie hasn't been a main focus, it can prove to be a problem. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d1171e0a2c3e,3978B5847C18,"I read an article stating that if a tie were to happen the election would be thrown to the house of representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. This would anger a heap of people for many reasons, one stating it would almost rule out their vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6255b47f150b,3978B5847C18,"Secondly, the electoral college simply takes away from voting in general. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0ac41357f7e1,3978B5847C18,"An example of this is lets say Obama won popular vote, he should win because thats what America wants right? No, because what if another president won electoral vote? that president would win and take away the point in voting. This is unfair because we the people would like to have a better say in who becomes our president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7457bac11d34,3978B5847C18,"In the article I read, it stated ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. unfair, outdated, irrational"" I agree completely ",Claim,Effective,,,
+43bbc875c347,3978B5847C18,"How is it irrational? Well simply because it is just an extra step added on. In all reality our country would be fine without it. Popular vote is exactly what we need, and that alone is enough. And while I do believe it's good to go an extra step, it shouldn't go when not needed. This to me is most important because I could argue all day long and in the end this would be my argument. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6e2c652bdb64,3978B5847C18,"I realize that it has its upsides but it is just unfair, outdated, and irrational ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ecadcb055f3b,3980C03BD90A,I would like it if you would just keep the Electoral college because it would be so much easier to pick a president then if we the people had to pick the president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+65fe853c8e40,3980C03BD90A,"If we screw up and pick the wrong president then its our fault, but if you all pick the president it'll be your fault if the president turns out to be good or not. Besides the founding fathers founded the Electoral college so we should keep it just for their sake. Anyway the Electoral College consists of the selection of the electors which then when there picked they decide who is the new or repeating President of the United States of America. The reasons I would like to see the Electoral college do good is because the first reason as to why you should just keep the Electoral college is because everyone will want to be president heres an example .The Electoral college requires a presidential canidate to have transregional appeal. If you have a solid regional favorite you go for them states first then you work around to different states to get more Electoral votes but then if you leave that state that was with you all the way then they atomatically switch to the other person that has been campaigning around all the other states and takes your states what are you supposed to do then? The only thing you can do is just go back and try to get your state back.. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac76d34ff6c2,399C14D08042,"I think we can keep it, But improve it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+17f050b62d2f,399C14D08042,Like some people do not want to just vote for a slate they want to vote for a president. How about making that happen that's a easy one. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9797a4ae18af,399C14D08042,"Lets look at some of the other side why are they against it. Remember what happen in the 2000 fiasco election, so much stuff went wrong with that one. How about what happened in 1960 in louisianna, when nearly succeed in replacing the democratic electors with new ones who oppose for John F. Kennedy a vote for Kennedy would never actually got that vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de82b55ed83c,399C14D08042,What if that happens again? Thats a hard one we can improve the stuff ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+85f425852726,399C14D08042,like vote on a piece of paper and put it in this huge box and mail that huge box to someone who can talley up the votes so he can get them or something like that. how can we improve the system in a way everybody can join like a website or a likely matter. The president votes only need 29 electoral votes to win. Why not everybody votes not electoral votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bbe6120914b9,399C14D08042,It can be argued that the Electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for candidate who has no hope of carrying thier state ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08b9e0a25f18,399C14D08042,"Democrats in texas, for example or Republicans in California. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+624cef979095,399C14D08042,The aviods the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of votes and cast. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8984ceaf1272,399C14D08042,What if we do it like we did it back then wouldn't that be easier then doing it the hard way. instead of having a no region have everybody vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e72384c54075,399C14D08042,"Would you include the others since they might feel disenfranchised I know I would, is there no regard for the other states ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4cb677027344,399C14D08042,Is there appeal for a unlikely to be a successfui president. The winner-take-all program how is that working? It is form on a method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. For Example in 2012 election to focus thier campaign efforts on the toss-up states. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05ce414680ba,39AD2FCCD35E,I think the principal should require community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+70917850b08c,39AD2FCCD35E,This is because if teaches life lessons ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e99dc6ca058,39AD2FCCD35E,and it is good for the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f8de3b47d29,39AD2FCCD35E,"To begin with, I think the principal should require community service. This is because it teaches life lessons that will help you in the future. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+088c6b9e71cd,39AD2FCCD35E,"For example, I volunteer for community service at a place called PET. This stands for Personal Energy Transportation. It is an amazing thing to do. You build all-terrain wheel chairs for handicapped people all over the world, but mostly in third world countries. The wheel chairs have three wheels and are designed to go through deep sand, over sharp rocks, and up and down steep inclines. In this workshop, it teaches teamwork, and makes you more mechanically minded. It is also a very courageous, bold, selfless thing to do and it will really change someone's life. Another example is that people sometimes down want to do certain activities because their boring. With required community service that will have to do things that they normally wouldn't do. By doing these things they build character and self esteem. This will help them in the future with doing homework, getting into a good college, and even with wanting to do community service again. This is why our principal should require community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+11ca063ad670,39AD2FCCD35E,"In addition, I think the principal should require community service because it is good for the community. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+308adf6f5b1a,39AD2FCCD35E,"t help the community in times of need. For example, when you are driving down a busy road or highway you see people throwing bags, cigarette buds, and even clothes out windows of their cars, not worrying about were they end up, in sewers, on the sides of roads, even inside animals. There are some types of community service that actually pick up all this trash around a city. This is important because it teaches character and it makes the city look better and more professional. Another example is that it community service could help other people in the community. There are elder homes where people drop off their elders that can't take care of themselves and people take care of them there. Some workers use this for community service or that is even their job. It can help you in the future to teach you how to take care of elderly people and it even help the community so the people that work out in the city don't get slowed down by having to take care of them. It could also make the elders feel wanted and feel comfortable in a new home. This is why our principal should require community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+85fe83f3c560,39AD2FCCD35E,"In conclusion, our principal should require community service. This is because it teaches life lessons and it's good for the community. Life lessons help you later of in life when trying to apply for a college or helping out a friend. Community service also changes people's lives. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b5073f31cf38,39DCB6EF34D9,"I don't care what google does for driverless cars, I think they may be good for a small town such as Berne, but there are a lot of cons to this whole issue. I think it would be fun to have cars we don't have to drive ourselfs but an issue with that is what if we do get into an accidnet in a bigger city. I'm nuetral on this topic because they aren't truly driverless ars if they still need a driver. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d103be973c44,39DCB6EF34D9,"I don't particularly care if we get driverless cars or not. Kids have been waiting to get their license for generations, if we get driverless cars does that mean the age of legal driving decreases? Would children be able to drive, if so that's not too fair ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3beaf778d8a,39DCB6EF34D9,. Those kids would miss out on learning these skills to drive that everyone else had to learn. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd42b28e5aac,39DCB6EF34D9,"I don't know if driverless cars is a bad thing or a good thing, but I'd rather stick to my littly chevy car. I say this becasue, I have to stay awake for either car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4714ce603d35,39DCB6EF34D9,"If i were to have a car that drove itself, I'd sleep in the back of my car until i had reached my desination. But if I'm needed to navigate through rough areas then I'd rather drive the whole way to my desination. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fe4721f271f,39DCB6EF34D9,"I understand that these cars would give you a form of entertainment to keep you occupied while in the vehicle, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9c702bd1b4e3,39DCB6EF34D9,but I'd fall asleep and wouldn't wake up when the car needed me. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+de8bc617fc02,39DCB6EF34D9,"It is handy though, a car like this ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4aa8cbc4e802,39DCB6EF34D9,but one would have to wonder the cost of a car like that. Probably something none of us could afford to buy ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+05cd413ed97b,39DCB6EF34D9,"But it would be nice to not have to worry about other cars, 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eb6db2fb8ade,39DCB6EF34D9,"although when you come to a stop, although it has sensros on the car, does it sense the other driverless car? What if that car in the other line isnt't driverless and the driver decided to wave you along and let you go first, what would the car do? Does it truly function probably at an intersection? ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1c16138455c5,39DCB6EF34D9,"I dont particularly care about this kind of car, I learned how to drive and I'd rather just do that. Although thus driverless car sounds safer, I'm sure it would make less mistakes than I do, I don't quite trust it. Reason being is the issue with other drivers at an intersection, or the age of legal driving, then the not paying attention part of sitting in that car. If your car is navigating itself, do you really trust where you're going?   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+25e6b1604901,39DD51C9D811,"They should keep the Electoral college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+eecd8434d619,39DD51C9D811,Because its where people vote to choose who's going to be the president and the vice president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09336ceb0a06,39DD51C9D811,"If they have 538 electors they have to count them all not 270/538 because its not fair. I am Agree with the ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" they can have a certificate even if they did not won. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+61f8659e728b,39DD51C9D811,Voters get confused ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7654870dbde,39DD51C9D811,"because the state convention, presidential candidates and the state central committee don't make up their minds....Why American people should considere themselves lucky if that was Back in 1960's, what makes them so sure that American people are going to be lucky again? well they might get lucky this time but not always they're going to be lucky every year its difficult and we are in 2015 now. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b42dc32921f,39DD51C9D811,The electoral college have to change for good if they dont they wont see any votes when its time to vote ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ed81ab3b83af,39E4DC4B4915,I would love it if the electoral college was gone ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7b9b99003a0e,39E4DC4B4915,it really is crazy if people are thinking their voting for someone when they really aren't like the presidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1935e19a8250,39E4DC4B4915,We actually help pick our state senators because when we vote for presidents we are actually voting for the canidates electors. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64fd848f52fd,39E4DC4B4915,"Some states have a winner takes all system, and what that system does is awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. But Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of proportional representation. after the prsidential election, our governor prepares a certificate of asertainment, l isting all of the canidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ffe4457a461c,39E4DC4B4915,"Under the electoral college system, we do not vote for presidents, but for the slate of electors who then elect the president. We should consider ourselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century, the system allows for much worst. Consider that state legislaturwes are responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.
+
+Back in 1960, segregationist in Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with new electors with new electors who would oppose for John F. Kennedy. In the same vein, ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast deciding vote for whomever they plaese.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53f448a0bcbf,39F8DB13BB4F,How safe would you feel if you there was a car driveing itself beside you? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+614ed03df710,39F8DB13BB4F,I am against the use of driverless cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a66a80f5c747,39F8DB13BB4F,"people will abuse this technolgy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47a17d2d100e,39F8DB13BB4F,it might not be the most reliable way to get around ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+416bc465e657,39F8DB13BB4F,"people would be more likely to fall asleep at the wheel. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97bdf0e8e5a9,39F8DB13BB4F,If you look at people now who text and drive and do other things that they arent soppoust to they will be more likely to do it in a driverless car thinking that the car will do everything for them. As it says in paragraph two in this article that the car would show a message when the person needed to take over the wheel but if they are texting or doing something else that they shouldent be doing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84db80716f36,39F8DB13BB4F,witch is true because some people fall asleep while actually in controll of the car so taking away the abilty to controll the car would make it much easier of them to fall asleep. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb5beb199348,39F8DB13BB4F,"because what if the computer and sensors randomly short out or they mess up and send the car into a telephone pole, tree, ect. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34231c29f74a,39F8DB13BB4F,"I think that driverless cars are a bad idea because people will become more tired at the wheel, its not reliable, and people are going to do stuff that they shouldent and its gonna eighter cause them or someone else to get killed. This tecnolgy seems like a good idea to a lot of peopel im sure but its not a good idea because it will end up causeing a lot more deaths i think jsut because people wont pay attention or fall asleep or the car itself will find a way to crash. I think that driverkess cars would be a bad thing overall. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d1a212b64bd2,39FFFE0E3490,"I would like to address a concern that seems to have the American people questioning their voting decisions. As a responible citizen of the United States of America, upholding your right to vote is an important duty. However, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1848006dfd92,39FFFE0E3490,"in the case of nationally voting to decide our vital political figures, such as the President and Vice-President, the ballot of the Electoral College is not giving the voters of America a fair result when it comes to the final moments of a presidental election. ",Position,Effective,,,
+36450de6a117,39FFFE0E3490,the electors for the state of which a citizen is voting in can be easily overturned to a vote for the canidate of which is opposite to what that citizen has elected to vote for. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eb663e8bc177,39FFFE0E3490,"The year of the 2000 campaign, Bush vs. Gore, for the presidency is an excellent example of how this Electoral College is unfair for voters. As Bradford Plumer has addressed in an excerpt of his writing: ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" from
+
+Mother Jones , he stated that Al Gore did indeed win the popular vote, but however he lost the presidency because of the quirks of the Electoral College. Also stated by Bradford Plumer is that ""The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a94f5190313,39FFFE0E3490,"Another example of how the Electoral College is unfair goes back to the 1960 campaign. Again stated by Bradford Plumer, ""The segregationists in the Louisiana legislature had nearly come to success in replacing Democratic electors with new electors that would oppose John F. Kennedy."" The state of Louisiana had attempted to do so because the popular vote for Kennedy, would not have actually gone to Kennedy; if they had succeeded in replacing those electors. There is also raise for concern in the event of a tie in a campaign. All 50 states would have only one vote and the selection of the House of Representatives would most likely not reflect the will of the American people. Also, the Senate chooses the vice-president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd90d52ca6cc,39FFFE0E3490,"As an American citizen looking forward to uphold my duty as a responible voter, I ask that we abloish the Electoral College and make the change to deciding among a popular vote. I believe that this change will engage Americans who respectfully choose not to vote to make the choice to vote. It will also give the citizens of America a more fair campaign to vote for when it comes time to vote for a new president. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+315a7643a4a9,39FFFE0E3490,"Last but not least, the small percentage of voters who are visiting the ballots for the first time would have a better understanding of how the voting system works ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9951b577a5ab,3A00AE848492,"The Face of Mars isn't a face at all! It's just the shadows that gives the eyes, nose and mouth a look. It could be possible for the aliens to create the Face of Mars but it'll take ages for the aliens to perform a task like that. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+34960658f3b1,3A00AE848492,The Face of Mars is only a Natural Landform that has been around Mars since it was created. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+82252aa43295,3A00AE848492,"The Face of Mars is located in Cydonia in Mars. Since Mars is mostlikely cloudy, the photos were taken when Mars was cloudless and was in open in Cydonia. MGS had took enough pictures during those times when it cloudless. Pictures were taking for many reasons. One of the reasons was for taxpayers. Jim Garvin, a chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, wanted this to happen for profit. But, some other reasons were to learn about Mars and it's surroundings for the next ship to travel there. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7af5df259242,3A00AE848492,It really wasn't build by aliens nor any other creature out in space. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+acc09a7c6d43,3A00AE848492,The Face of Mars was made 25yrs ago. No one knows how it was made but it was located in Cydonia on Mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f2bab67e04b,3A00AE848492,"The Face, however, is an illusion using the shadows as the eyes, mouth, and the nose. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6f4bb1fcddd9,3A00AE848492,"One day in Sept. 1997, MGS, or Mars Global Surveyor, had landed onto the Red Planet had confirmed it as a natural landform. Not everyone was satisfied since they wanted more proof for this. It was April '98, cloudy time of year on Mars, where people couldn't use their telescopes to see the Face for themselves. So, on April 8th, 2001, MGS gotten close enough for another look. They've took another picture using a better camera that could see anything clear like a airplane, a truck, or a Egyptian-style pyramids! Once they've gotten the picture, People were satisfied. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de81a6c82180,3A00AE848492,"Aliens never made the Face of Mars and the Face of Mars isn't real at all! It's just a natural landform by having the shadows covering up most of the landform making it appear as a face. For the conclusion, Cydonia has a natural landform on it that appears itself as a face using the shadows to make the illusion. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+07f4d23f67b8,3A22A2432F99,"The Electoral College is not perfect and it may be called broken by some people, but in all truth it isn't. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8b36f48685ee,3A22A2432F99,The Electoral College is a good way to make sure that a election won't end in a tie ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3c256b4b133f,3A22A2432F99,"It also makes sure that certain regions, or states, don't control the vote with their population. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5b80df63a616,3A22A2432F99,"The Electoral College can be edited if it needs to though. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9da0e35f622,3A22A2432F99,The Electoral College is very good at insuring one winner. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+751b6db737f3,3A22A2432F99,"It has this ability, because to be a tie both canidates have to have 269 votes which is highly unlikly. To have a President chossen majority has to vote one way (270). Now with a ""winner-takes-all"" system that his country, USA, has, there are only so many combinations of states' votes for one party that there would be a tie. Since the beggening of the Electoral College there has only been two ties. The Electoral College does make it easier for there not to be a tie, because more people voting into selected individuals then having them vote makes it easier for less mess ups and faster counting of votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6879d7b7cbf7,3A22A2432F99,The Electoral College also makes sure one part of the country does not get favored and make the others feel like their votes did not count. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+37f5190930ff,3A22A2432F99,If one canidate is favored in a area and if it has a lot of people then that candidate would win with a direct vote. The bigger cities with more people would get every political ad and the canidates would be more focused there instead of getting everyone's opinion. The other places would feel left out and would be less likely to vote meaning not a true meaning of who majority wants as President. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c3f7820ce6a,3A22A2432F99,Nothing is the world is ever made perfect forever. The Electoral College was clearly a great idea when it was made or it would never be put into action. The Electoral College does have slight problems that rarely happen. The best thing about it though is that people could vote and change details about it if it was that big of a deal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb20b8bbf14f,3A22A2432F99,"As ""Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution,"" people wanted/ thought it would be fair to count the District of Columbia as a ""state."" So people took a vote to make the change, thats why it is the the 23rd Amendment. When the USA gets more population, for a short time, there will be a odd amount of electoral votes, that means no ties. Until the popluation grows or decreases enough to make a even number of votes again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93e6b4a5723f,3A22A2432F99,"
+There is pleanty of things wrong in this world, but one thing that is pretty good right now is the Electoral College. More times than not it has one winner and one loser, and rarely a tie. It makes sure that nobody is a favorite or feels like it. Also it shows things can change if something is a problem or needs fixing. The Electoral College is not perfect, but is not broken. Thank you for reading my letter, I hope you take it into concideration when deciding to keep it or not.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+60fbe6ea34bc,3A317901A1B7,"I believe that doing community service is a good thing to do for others, but I also believe that people should be able to do what they want or need to do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+42120b022f75,3A317901A1B7,so I think we should at least vote to it. ,Position,Effective,,,
+d0bf5fc2a663,3A317901A1B7,That way it will be a fair decision by the people for the people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7a097db1781,3A317901A1B7,"It would be good to clean up trash or help others, but people also like spending their time on their own terms, therefore a vote in favor or not in favor would be best. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3af7170f75c,3A317901A1B7,Another good idea would be to have a meeting with parents and teachers and see what they think of this ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8faac10cbd7c,3A317901A1B7,"kids love to play video games, watch T.V. and sit around now, because it's more fun to them then cleaning up trash, or helping someone out, I am Against doing community service, but if you chose any of the ideas in this letter, it's up to the students, the teachers, and the parents now. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41778e1a0127,3A33CD269EA2,The Electoral College is a process not a place. When the founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and also a popular vote of approved citizens. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+8db6dcde73cc,3A33CD269EA2,That should stay remain the same they should not be any change to the Electoral College system. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be018ecf8faf,3A33CD269EA2,"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electorals. When the electors have a meeting thats when they are able to for the President, Vice President that is running for office. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors, majority of 270 electoral vote, is to elect the President. Each state is entitled allotment in its Congressional delegation which means one for each member in the House of Representives plus two for your Senators.
+
+Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated three electors and are treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. Each candidate that is running in the election has their own group of electors, generally chosen by the candidate's political party. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. The voters help choose their state's electorals when they voted for the President, when they vote for the candidate they are actually votin for the candidate's electors. Voters are more likely to pay attention to the efforts the candidate put to win the election like the campagin.
+
+The Electoral College system has a method called ""winner- take-all that awards all the electors to the winning presidental candidate. After the presidental election the state governor will prepare a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" that which list all the of the candidates that ran for office, along with the names for their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winner of the presidental candidate of your state. The Certificate of Ascertainment is sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the offical records of presidential election.                      ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5d236d0b93f,3A3AD368D10E,"The Electoral College is a method of voting for President and Vice President that was produced by our founding fathers in the articles of the Constitution. The Electoral College has been in use for centuries, but it is time that we disregard it. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+207364daae38,3A3AD368D10E,"The Electoral College was a smart idea in the seventeen and eighteen hundreds, but as our country continues to change, it is necessary to change the way that we elect our leaders. The Electoral College has remained untouched and exactly the same for hundreds of years and this has caused it to be extremely outdated. ",Position,Effective,,,
+946643f89752,3A3AD368D10E,"Not only is it far too outdated and complicated to help our voting process, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8f7cc623ee3,3A3AD368D10E,"but the Electoral College does not give the voters voice; instead, it takes it away from them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+50bca7105755,3A3AD368D10E,The Electoral College also can lead to concerning situations that the country and its people do not want to be put in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0382f8eb63ee,3A3AD368D10E,"The question of whether or not to abolish or keep the Electoral College in tact is a heavily debated one, but it is clear that getting rid of the Electoral College will be highly beneficial to the voters of America. The Electoral College was established hundreds of years ago when our Constitution came about and it created a complicated process to elect the President and Vice President of the United States. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c044e4f74e1a,3A3AD368D10E,"Our country is changing day by day, and we certainly have made monumental changes since the Electoral College came to be. According to Bradford Plumer, author of, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" a poll was taken by Gallup in the year 2000 that showed that less than just forty percent of Americans support the election system that we have now. This proves that it is time for a change and that the system that we currently have in place has been in place for far too long. The everchanging United States of America is in desperate need of an up-to-date election system that fits the current needs of the American people. The Electoral College is not only outdated, but it is also an extremely complex voting method. In an article entitled, ""What Is the Electoral College,"" written by the Office of the Federal Register, it is explained that the Electoral College is a lengthy process that involves the choosing of electors and the issuing of Certificates of Ascertainment after both the people and the electors have voted. The Electoral College does far more harm than good for our country and for this reason especially, I believe that America should begin to elect its Presidents using the popular voting method. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c98aa44822d5,3A3AD368D10E,"In his article, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" Bradford Plumer specifically states that the people themselves do not vote for their desired candidate, but instead, they vote for electors who then vote for the more popular presidential candidate. The people should be the ones who vote for the president because they will be the ones who are governed by the president. The Electoral College gives no voice to the people and is considered by many to be a non-democratic way of voting and is often referred to anachronism. Today, it is a struggle to encourage people to vote and be present on election day because no one feels like their vote matters. People say that one vote doesn't make a difference and that there is no point in filling out a ballot if it has no real affect on which candidate is chosen. The Electoral College and the process it established is really just confirming these opinions. People do not feel like they are contributing because when it comes down to it, the electoral votes are the deciding votes. The Electoral College only has a little over five hundred electors that are representing the millions of regular people who show up at the polls on election day. In order to make the people feel like their opinions are being voiced and their voice is being heard, and to increase voter turnout on election day, it is imperative that the country switches over to election by popular vote. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+78096e2a545d,3A3AD368D10E,"Not only is it not hard to accomplish, but it has happened before. According to Bradford Plumer in his article, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" in the early 1960s, people who favored races being seperated in society were almost able to replace Democratic electors with a new set of electors who supported the opposite party. Also, some corrupt electors who are not pleased with the popular vote will simply vote for whomever they please. Electors clearly have trouble being trusted and there is obviously some extreme dislike for the system we have now. The Electoral College also causes some problems when instances like a tie in the electoral vote come about. In this case, a tie in the Electoral College would be thrown to the House of Representatives, who would then vote for the President. The Electoral College brings about uneccessary problems that could all be avoided if the country converted the way of electing to election by popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+862f2ef111c3,3A3AD368D10E,"In summation, the Electoral College has been around for hundreds of years, but it is time that the United States makes the change that would improve the way of electing its future Presidents. The Electoral College is outdated and complicated, does not allow the voice of the people to be heard, and leads to uneccessary voting complications. For these reasons, I vehemently feel that we should switch from the Electoral College to election by popular vote.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3155a1e35652,3A40B235E0C4,"I agree in favor yo keep the
+
+Electoral College ",Position,Adequate,,,
+666ea6dc25c0,3A40B235E0C4,"Beacause the founding fathers etablished it in the
+
+Constitution as a compromise between election of the
+
+President by a vote in
+
+Congress and elction of the
+
+President by a poular of qualified citizens. We would not want to change the
+
+Constitution that are great founding fathers had once made before ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+78f70071cf8d,3A40B235E0C4,The single best arguement againt the electoral college is what we might call the disaster facter. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6e27a4ca290b,3A40B235E0C4,The american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election in the century the system allows for much worse. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3def9f4941af,3A40B235E0C4,Prehaps most worrying is the prospect of the election vote would be tied in the elctorlal vote. In that case the election would thown to the house of represenitives where state delegation vote on the president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f230aa25a95a,3A40B235E0C4,In conclsion this is why we should keep the Electoral college. Because they have plans for back up and everything is orginised for america.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c36a91102a3b,3AD47B68A985,"Being a person of politics yourself, you of all people should know that many compromises have been made over the course of the establishment of the United States. However, some of the compromises, like the electoral college, were made because of factors in the past and are now not needed in today's modern democracy. While the electoral college once worked as a compromise in the past, it is an archaic system that unfairly represents the votes of citizens all across the nation. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ba974fba4e8f,3AD47B68A985,"A popular vote should instead be utilized to fairly choose the people of power in this country and would better represent voters' opinions. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+92929708b18e,3AD47B68A985,"In implementing the electoral college, most states' votes either go to one candidate or the other, leading to candidates to only campaign in swing states (Bradford Plumer 13). ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5243d584328c,3AD47B68A985,This may not seem like much of a problem ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+36116b8fdb06,3AD47B68A985,"but consider this: a swing state such as Florida with over 20 electoral votes could go to a candidate who could have won by a 51 to 49 percent margin. This means that all the voters who voted for the other candidate no longer count, making the electoral college ineffective at voicing the opinions of the populous. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+0335e69ad184,3AD47B68A985,"Also, many states may not even see the future president at all, like in the 2000 election where the candidates did not even go once and talk in seventeen states. This leads to a poor democracy because voters in these states will surmise that if the president will not bother to visit their state, they shouldn't bother on making an educated decision when voting, or may choose to not vote at all. In a election by popular vote, presidents will have to make greater strides in getting the people's votes and citizens will then have more of an impetus in learning more about their country's government and politics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b0472d16e30d,3AD47B68A985,"With the Electoral College, there is also the risk that electors may not necessarily vote for the candidate the people want as president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4489c22feef4,3AD47B68A985,"In the Electoral College, ""voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president"" (Bradford 10). These electors may not necessarily vote for what candidate voters want most as president, and could do what they might feel is the best decision; however, this is not always what the majority of voters want in a president and could end up with a poor president. In addition, most voters know very little about how these electors are chosen and are not in control of who their state's electors are. In a way this system is a bit corrupt, because the voters don't have the final say of the president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b78b2afe1ee3,3AD47B68A985,"In addition, a tie is likely in an electoral vote because of swing states, which has the potential to lead to a disaster. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0a6e711e8da8,3AD47B68A985,"If two candidates receive the same number of electoral votes and tie in an election, the House of Representatives then chooses the president, while the Senate choose the vice president, but their votes may not show who voters want as president, seeing that voters often vote one party for president while the other for their representatives (Plumer 12). The vote for president is distributed unevenly, and states with many voters will only be represented by one vote. this could lead to the House of Representatives choosing a president that is only liked by a small population and this cannot easily be undone. Swing states are the only thing that can cause or prevent a tie in elections, and a tie has almost occured in 1976 in Hawaii and in 1968 in Ohio. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b1529320fae0,3AD47B68A985,Those in favor of the electoral college argue that because candidates will focus on swing states in order to win voters in those states will pay closer attention to the election and make a more educated decision (Richard A. Posner 20). ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a5685f2e48d7,3AD47B68A985,"However, this is not necessarily the case, and there are plenty of other well-educated voters in other states who have opinions that will never be counted because of the electoral college. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+f76bc69025e7,3AD47B68A985,"If the popular vote becomes the new method in choosing the president, voters all across the nation will pay more attention to elections because they feel that their vote can make a difference, and it will. This will in turn increase the number of voters actively paying attention to their country's decisions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f182327855c2,3AD47B68A985,"Because of the Electoral College, ""about one-half the eligible American population did vote in [2012's] election"" (Posner 23). Although this number is mentioned as a success in Posner's arguement, this means that there is one-half of American voices left unheard. Democracy only works if all citizens vote, but they will only take the time to vote if they know that they can make a difference. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a5a6e263ba2,3AD47B68A985,"Change needs to happen and it has to soon. If not, a poor president could be elected and then who knows what bad things could happen? With the popular vote, more people will be heard, and they will better take part in their country's government, leading to a better nation.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+757adf501306,3ADF2D3323BE,Allowing students to use cell phones at school is alright as long as you don't use them in class ,Position,Adequate,,,
+46bb748b9bd1,3ADF2D3323BE,"The reason why I say this is because when you are in class the teacher is teaching and if you start using it, it's disrespectful. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d77340116c4,3ADF2D3323BE,"Also, you'll get caught and your phone will be taken away. When you start having free time or lunch period, then its alright for you to use your phone because nobody is teaching you. My opinion is that its better off if we can use our phones while having lunch or break time, so nobody can tell you to put your phone away or take it away from you because its our time to do whatever we want to do. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07a0c6088f38,3ADF2D3323BE,Using phones in class is really disrespectful and you'll never learn anything in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0fe47a553c3,3ADF2D3323BE,"If you are in a middle of a class, your teacher is teaching and suddenly you have a phone call or text. you shouldn't pick it up. Ignore the phone and stay with what the teacher is teaching you about. Also, you shouldn't leave your phone on in class because then its easier to concentrate what teacher is telling you. If your phone is on then your phone will vibrate, ring, and bother you. Then the phone's noises will urge you to pick it up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f9867c5b29f,3ADF2D3323BE,"The bell ring's and its time for lunch or break time. Now, finally you can use your phone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6c47eb470d6,3ADF2D3323BE,"Nobody is going to bother you and no teacher will be teaching you. So, now you can do whatever you want. Look at the text your friend gave you or call him. Also, no teacher or principle will come up to you and take your phone away because it's your time to do whatever you want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d929da21f7c9,3ADF2D3323BE,"If the school's were like this, then nobody was going to pick up there phone's in class and they were going to wait until free time. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7c1fce448199,3B3A47EA684D,I believe that changing school policy so that students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average is a bad decision. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+15217314108e,3B3A47EA684D,If the school policy was changed there would not be many students participating in sports or other activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4ebbe176b4a5,3B3A47EA684D,"Many students have a grade C average which would inconvenient them from participating in school sports and/or activities.
+
+Not many students who have a grade B average are athletic to participate in sports but would enjoy participating in school activities such as clubs. But if there are not enough students to participate in school sports it would just be a waste of money to purchase equipment for those sports. Many students who play sports have a grade C average and are very athletic students. It would also be unfortunate for students who do play sports to not be able to participate if they have a grade C average. If those students do not participate they would probably not participate in school activities that they do not enjoy. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+49d17d3e7b65,3B3A47EA684D,Changing school policy is also a bad idea because many students rely on athletic scholarships to get into college since not all families are lucky enough to send their children to college without having to worry about have financial problems doing so ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95a158240573,3B3A47EA684D,"But since the prices for college tuition is going up not many students have enough money to attend college right after high school. Many of those students also have a grade C average. Also many students who are very good at sports but not very academically skilled may see that sports are what help them get by in life. Those students also find it very difficult to get into a good college they can afford if they have a grade C average but do not have a chance to get into a college if they cannot get a scholarship for athleticism. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+29612e365060,3B3A47EA684D,So I hope you reconsider of changing school policy so that students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average because not many students do. Those students may also rely on baseball or football scholarships to get into college if they cannot afford it on their own. Also they schools would be wasting money for buying sports equipment if there are not enough students for those sports to play since many of them have a grade C average. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+acec9c3f24fb,3B5EE97C7C53,"Driverless cars would be very beneficial to our society. It would make an immense impact on our culture and provide simple, fast ways to get around. In the article, many different positives are thoughouly expressed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+98e891400f24,3B5EE97C7C53,"Because of these specific examples, I believe that driverless cars will be extremely important in America's future and greatly benefit our use of transportation. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+1c3da67869af,3B5EE97C7C53,"The United States, as well as other parts of the world, experience oil and fuel issues. There are frequent shortages of these particular substances, which are extrememly important for our daily lives. In the article, it is said, ""The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world."" In this quote, from the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming,"" Google cofounder Sergey Brin expresses that these driverless cars will be beneficial to America and the rest of the world ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+12109f010cc6,3B5EE97C7C53,"He says that these cars will use less fuel, which unfortunately tends to run short. Driverless cars will benefit the the world's fuel issues. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b8c78732dd4d,3B5EE97C7C53,Another positive to driverless cars are the entertainment and noficiation aspects. Drivers will be able to get different things done while driving. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cc0f69d890a4,3B5EE97C7C53,"They also will no longer need to worry about distraction factor of driving. Drivers won't have to worry about trying to answer a phone call, respond to a text, or change a song and drive at the same time. The article states, ""Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not available to driveres trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern."" In this quote, Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver, explains that a driver won't need to worry about answering a text. The driver can answer the text or phone call while the car is not in need of assistance. Fortunately, the car only needs manual assistance in areas of road construction or accidents. This feature of driverless cars will greatly benefit driving today. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+80d32a55a747,3B5EE97C7C53,"However, these driverless cars still do obtain some faults. These faults are included in the article. ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires."" This shows that drivers must retain some sort of awareness of what is going on around them. They cannot take naps or completely zone out, especially when approaching an accident or work zone. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b4d668c3c21c,3B5EE97C7C53,"Although there are few flaws to the designs of driverless cars, these flaws should be fixed very soon. The article states, ""Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day."" This quote shows that many of these issues should be resolved in the very near future. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c6c46df4ac41,3B5EE97C7C53,"Because of these specific examples in the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming,"" I believe that driverless cars will be very beneficial to America and it's many modes of transportation. Driverless cars will use less fuel than our typical cars we use today. They will also require an immensely small amount of attention. Most importantly, any small flaw that these cars possess will be resolved extremely soon. Driverless cars will change our lives for the better. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+bdd9f54eea83,3B61207AD210,"I think driverless cars sound like a good idea on paper, but in the real world they just are not far enough advanced yet for me to feel safe being in or around one.
+
+They are not even fully driverless yet, a person still needs to be ready to take the wheel at any given time.
+
+However in the future when they become more advanced and safe they could potentialy prevent accidents. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7f1b5cfeba39,3B61207AD210,I think driverless cars are still a thing of the future and not present. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+633e14a3fca9,3B61207AD210,"As much as I think they need work now, I am not against the development of them as they could bring many potential benefits. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6e7a21b9197,3B61207AD210,"In the article it states how movies and television shows have been fascinated with driverless cars for a long time, seeing them as a thing of the future.
+
+I think they still are a thing of the future because they still need a driver to be able to take the wheel at any given time.
+
+The only way I can see them being the safest they can be, is if all cars are driverless and they could interact with each other.
+
+Right now the driverless cars are mostly just assisting like antilock brakes, as stated in pararaph six. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2640393e771,3B61207AD210,"When the technology eventually becomes good enough to be able to fully drive without a driver there are still laws to be discussed. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19603219678a,3B61207AD210,"Only a few states allow them so far, and what good is a car that is only legal in three states and the District of Columbia if you do not live there.
+
+I think eventually the laws will change enough to allow them to function as long as they are safe and can pass certain tests. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b472d1cfeb60,3B61207AD210,"Then the question comes up about blame in the event of an accident, whose fault is it if a computer is controlling the vehicle? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cacd2c6bae4f,3B61207AD210,"As of now driverless cars seem to be more trouble than help.
+
+With time I feel that they could become very safe and reliable vehicles with advancements in technology.
+
+There are many manufacturers trying to make driverless cars, at least one of them is bound to make something good eventually.
+
+In conclusion, I think driverless cars should keep being developed, however they still need a lot of work.           ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f6a30db37d0,3B6B5DF452D6,I say that we keep the electoral college because it was the way that the founding fathers found out how to balance out how the peope should decide. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1d76b5a5fe1c,3B6B5DF452D6,"But they were only allowed to vote if they had certain papers to allopw saying they are citizens. The way that it works is that each person running has a group of electors and is counted by the congress to find out who is winning in the campain. It consiswts of 538 electors ,majority of 270 of the electoral votes are required to elect the president your state entittled allotment of elctors to help in the campain. They get one in the house of represntivies and two senators. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae6f47a5db73,3B6B5DF452D6,I think that keeping the electoral college is what we need nothing is wrong with the system since our fore fathers were around so why change it now ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63bf3e93d6e5,3B6B5DF452D6,"It says that each canidate has the option to pick his/her electors to be in for the election. Then on every fourth year after the first monday in november on tuesday the president is elected. But before they get there they go to each state saying there speeches and hopin that the majority of that state votes for them because most states use a ""winner takes all"" were if you get the majority you get the whole states vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+633c2428e60e,3B6B5DF452D6,"But if thats not enough then maybe this is why we should keep the electoral college. Even if Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole,and the U.S chamberer of comerce say its wrong and Al Gore. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3dc7322f11f3,3B6B5DF452D6,i think it should stay because it was the best and easiest way to figure out who should be elected for president/vice president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb03b6f4a81d,3B6B5DF452D6,But these speculaters dont understand that they are choosing the president and the electors before the vote of the president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e3e239a3faa6,3B6B5DF452D6,"They only see it happen one time since 1888 and everything goes crazy becuase gore was more popular and bush had more electoral votes and bush won even if gore was more popular. In 2012 when obama was elected over romney with a 61.7 to 51.3 because that almost all the states were using the electoral college all or nothing. In order for that one canidate to be elected the person needs to have a trans-regional vote for say romney only had the south thosw are not enough votes to win over the north and south. The canidates are mostley going for the ""swing states"" because they listen to the whole campain and decide who they think deserves it through there campain. Larger staes get way more attention becasue they are worth more points to the election. They try  to avoid run off elections because they are shot out of the water that way with casts as low as the mid 40's in percentage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+845f3e02a6e2,3B6B5DF452D6,Thats why i think the elctoral college deseres to stay. Not because al gore got mad cause he was favorite and still lost but over all i think that just because thats omething bad happend one time does not mean that the whole thing has to go down in flames. Like i said we need to keep it we have had it since the 1800's and there is literally nothing whrong with it so those are my reasons on why the ellctoral college should stay.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4aab8c964a2a,3B93FA6833FA,I believe that your possible new policy could really help the students who want to play sports also focus on their studies. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bd91fdd17f9,3B93FA6833FA,"I believe that some of the reasons that you should change the policy is, for one reason, the students can focus on their studies, for two, they can play sports and they also must make time for their studies as well as extracurricular activities such as sports and lastly, they will be able to focus on getting above a B average. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb1533955ff0,3B93FA6833FA,I am also a little against the idea because some gifted students in sports are not academically gifted. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c17364c44bfb,3B93FA6833FA,"This wouldn't give them the opportunity to be as best they can be in sports if they focus upon the negatives of not being on the sports team they are on. If you change the policy, then some kids who are great at their sport won't be able to help their school win any sporting competitions. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af1d149fe7e1,3B93FA6833FA,"While the kids can focus on their studies, they can make a larger and brighter future. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b63659c1010e,3B93FA6833FA,Many students who have a C average can try to focus upon their studies and maybe even get above the B average. The students can be great at juggling their time for their future lives as adults. This policy can help the students be the best they can be in anything. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+492b4d7afaa4,3B93FA6833FA,"The B average,
+
+I think is a little to high for some of my peers. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07fbd4ffc5a7,3B93FA6833FA,"Many don't focus upon their studies and teachers are time and time again to get them above their showing level of academics. Academics must have several students who try hard for their goal for whatever it is they want to do with their life. If somebody wants to be a millionaire, they have to work on being that throughout their life. Be a millionaire doesn't just come to you. You have to work your whole life for being this. If they want to be a hotdog man, a trash man, or even a McDonald's cashier, then they will have very little self-respect and very little low-self esteem. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16acea5ae20a,3B93FA6833FA,"I also oppose this policy because the students who wish to be a sports star must have good grades in College, but if they get below a B average in elementary, middle, or high school, then so what? the students try to juggle social and academics and if your grade skips a little bit, then they can't be on their team. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+451e3ee9837e,3B93FA6833FA,"So, as you can see, I am of a spilt mind as to what I want you to do. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+bd32d532ffc5,3B93FA6833FA,"I think that it would be both a great idea and bad idea, but whatever you choose, I am sure that it will be for the students best benefit and for the parents' as well. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d6d427d32f23,3B9A70FC3744,"When the US Constitution was first made, the idea of equality between the states was made. This meant that the size or population of a state gave it no disinct advantage over another. They did this through the creation of the House of Representatives and the Senate, yet there was one more issue they had to solve. This issue was how they could count the votes of citizens all aroun the US fairly. They solved it with electoral college, a system in which the voters don't directly vote for the president, but vote for a group, or slate, of people who have sworn to a canidate who vote for you. This system as Source 2 states can easily be broken with a group of swing votes in some states, but because it keeps thing equal, we must see that making popular vote the process isn't a good idea, because larger states will have more power. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b6eef81d3221,3B9A70FC3744,"The US should just remove the winner take all system and replace it with 'proportional representation"" to preserve equality and functionality. ",Position,Effective,,,
+6599f6472276,3B9A70FC3744,The first reason why we must change to proportional representation is because it preserves equality ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b88395150450,3B9A70FC3744,"As Source 1 states, this proportional representation is only done by Maine and Nebraska, but it makes it so that one party wont win the state, it is reigional in the state meaning that more people are represented through this. The winner take all system is too harsh, and can discount many people in swing and regular states. As Source 3 stated, the larger states need to be left alone to represent the US population. Proportional representation allows this with the ability to include even more opinions. With this informatin, it is easy to see how proportional representation will preserve the equality that popular vote represents. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9dc942d08857,3B9A70FC3744,The second reason why we must change to proportional representation is because it preserves functionality ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb1b227b490e,3B9A70FC3744,"One of the main arguments for electoral college, is that  it is more functional as compared to popular vote. This can be maintained through proportional representation. Source 3 stated that while the reguar electoral college has a chance of failing, it is not as high of a chance as popular vote is. Proportional representation keeps this functionality that those who support normal electoral college hide behind. This is also been proven to work without a hitch. As previously mentioned, Source 1 stated that this for of electoral college is already in Maine and Nebraska. These states have proven that this form of electoral college works, thus proving that we should change to proportional representation in order to maintain the functionality of regular electoral college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+de2f45f802dc,3B9A70FC3744,"In conclusion, we should switch the rules of electoral college from ""winner takes all"" to ""proportional representation"" in order to maintain equality and functionality. showing that while the founding fathers did have the best on their minds when electoral college was made, a change in it can benifit America for years to come.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b5eee852bf50,3BC989105A18,"Hello, Mr. Senator i'm writing this letter to you because i'm in favor of keeping the Electrocal College. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b827dbd89d0e,3BC989105A18,"I'm in favor of the Electroral college because ""the electoral college method is not democratic in a modern sense"". ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3fec7e3555b2,3BC989105A18,One reason is the certainty of the outcome you wont win if you have more popular votes but less electoral vote ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cc813125319a,3BC989105A18,"""It happened in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c99fa80f6cca,3BC989105A18,The second reason is Everyone's President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21d6f4d17822,3BC989105A18,"""The electroral College  requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president.""
+
+In the 2012 elections Romney was popular in the south ""no incentive to campaign heavily in those states."" He doesnt have to have to campaign that much in the south because he knows those states will vote for him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be5c406b8ef4,3BC989105A18,The third reason is the Swing States ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0f0e24bf68e,3BC989105A18,"""The winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates-as we saw in 2012-to focustheir campaing efforts on the toss-up state."" Voters in the toss-up states have to pay close attention to the campaign because they're the ones that are going to decide the election ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f6326edb9b2,3BC989105A18,. The forth reason is Big states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ae0f01235fd,3BC989105A18,"the bigger the states the more electoral votes they have and the presidential candidates pay more attention to those states ""a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in campaign than a small state does..."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+300824c519ec,3BC989105A18,The fifth Reason is Avoid Run-Off Elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd00dfbd77fd,3BC989105A18,"There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the preisdential election process, reduced by the electoral college, which invariably produces a clear winner..."" that was my last reason i hope it stays the same to elect presidents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a88c86826e33,3BC989105A18,There are alot of people that want the elctions to change but i think this is the best way to elect presidents ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+107f72643403,3BCA170070B3,I think the Electoral College should be brought down and let the popular vote decide who the president of the United States will be. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+109c49914e54,3BCA170070B3,"First of all, I believe the popular vote should be kept and the Electoral College brought down. I think this because what if some people dont agree with the opinion of others. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+476f6e8ac1ed,3BCA170070B3,"For example, lets say two people are running too be president of the United States. People vote and everything but then its up too the 538 electors. Then the 538 electors choose who they want as their president, 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President, as weeks go by, the new President is one of the two people that ran too be President was elected. Some people are happy and some people are mad because they put their vote in and they voted on the other person but that other person won and now they are angry.        ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+27126e850648,3BD1B5A4F714,I heard about your new requirements on community service and students in our school performing community service. I just wanted to give you my opinion on your expectation ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+2bd446da70c3,3BD1B5A4F714,I think it isn't a very good idea for it to be mandatory to perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3bce612ea1cb,3BD1B5A4F714,"It gives less opportunities for students to succeed in their goals, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6c734e0985b3,3BD1B5A4F714,it takes out our free time which gives us time to have fun and learn new things ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3afee6e4b58d,3BD1B5A4F714,"For example, if a student wanted to learn how to play an instrument, they wouldn't be able to learn it because there would be no time for lessons. They would have to be doing community service which would take away the opportunity to learn. They also have many other responsibilities besides community service such as taking care of a younger sibling, focusing on school and education, house chores, and many others. Community service would be another responsibility that a child would have to take on and which maybe not even be prepared for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9e98d9c01cd9,3BD1B5A4F714,Students wouldn't be able to have fun and enjoy their lives if they are stuck doing community service. They wouldn't have social time to hang out with their friends. They wouldn't even have time to be with their family as much. Children would be very miserable and would be very depressed at a young age. They wouldn't have to much of a great memory as a child either. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+1d35ca580323,3BD1B5A4F714,Community service isn't a very good thing to make students perform at an early age. It takes away time and opportunities and gives too much responsibility to students. Students should be able to enjoy their childhood and not remember it as cleaning up litter. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e261eb2a6a90,3C17ED55E3A8,I think the idea of every kid having to do community service is a great idea. ,Position,Effective,,,
+693ae51f78af,3C17ED55E3A8,It would help show the kids that by helping your community you are helping out everybody. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e2f30911ad42,3C17ED55E3A8,It also shows the pride and character each student has in their community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2e34d9cd7aca,3C17ED55E3A8,"If most kids don't help by doing something where they live they usually don't appreciate what they have were they live. Community service is a great way of helping give back what your city or town gives to you everyday. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b831089d298,3C17ED55E3A8,Many ways you could help give out community service jobs would be to say they were getting something in reward for doing this task. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b6d92c76af1c,3C17ED55E3A8,"There are many tasks you could give out each week. For example you could give tasks like going around and cutting peoples yards, helping clean up all the litter in the place, or helping repaint an old building or place that has been needing one for a long time. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3d626936468,3C17ED55E3A8,There are many different things you could get the kids to do to help their community. I encourage that you do make the students do community service. This can help them take more pride in what they do while in school and out of school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ee4601ea6fd1,3C17ED55E3A8,It would also make the school look better for encouraging community service. It would help give them more respect from the community. This would also help the whole community look better. It would give them respect from other communities and the state it is in. Getting respect from other places could help your town get new things to. It could help attract more businesses to the community. It could also help the community grow by having more people move to live there bringing new cultures to the community. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+670b7eb58c83,3C17ED55E3A8,"There are many things that community service could do for your community. It helps bring new ideas and ways of life, brings more respect, and brings more pride to your town. All these things help your community grow and socialize. They all affect you in many good ways to help everybody. These were just some ideas I was writing to you about making every student do at least some community service. I think it is a great idea and will encourage it all the time. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3dc200ea7c2e,3C1F9041C565,Should our way of voting in the United States be changed? The way we vote today is through the electoral college. Each president get a certain number of electoral votes and that is how we vote on specific leaders. The Electoral College process was established in our Constitution as a compromise. This way we could elect our president by a vote in Congress and election of our president by citizens who qualify. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a5b5ef9e99d7,3C1F9041C565,Is it not time for a change in the Electoral College? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1c780bcb3525,3C1F9041C565,"First off, the Electoral College is a specified process. This process consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is manditory to elect the President. The way this works is every state has a certain number of electoral votes, mostly due to population. For example, a larger state with a large population will have more electoral votes than a smaller state. Also, each candidate running for president in your state has their own group of elector. These electors are chosen based opon the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. There is a presidential electon held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday of the month of November. When you vote, you are helping choose your state's electors. When you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candiate's elecotrs. After your presidential election, your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" showing all the candidates who ran for President in your state and with the names of their respective electors. This also shows which electors will be representing your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6adaf2b76a17,3C1F9041C565,The are even a number of Presidents that tried to abolish the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f7b5bb019b9,3C1F9041C565,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, adn the AFL-CIO all agreed on abolishing it. It is proven that 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Most voters today are significantly uninformed. Some do not even know what or whom they are voting for. Some of these people are not even U.S. citizens. Yes, some states do require to so identification, although others do not. A direct election would be more specified and easier for people to choose and use. Some people overlook these detail while others enjoy the system because of the power it provides them. There are multiple errors in the voting process. There are certain people that do not even posess a high school degree, let alone a college degree, that vote just because they want to. The is a massive suply of ignorance and pride that fall into play with the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c4ed155e3dd,3C1F9041C565,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president they choose, but for a slate of electors, who in turn, elect the president. For instance, if you wanted to vote for a specific person you would vote for a slate of electors pledged to that person. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90ab1003e8da,3C1F9041C565,This method of voting is curupt and should be abolished. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2345a53190ab,3C1F9041C565,"The people in American should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the largest election crisis in a century; the system could have lead to much worse than that. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for choosing electors, adn that those electors could alwyas defy the will of the people ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5e417893991,3C1F9041C565,"In conclusion, why is the Electoral college unhealthy? This system of voting is outdated and has many flaws throughout its system. Without this system being changed is could have a tremendous affect in the future of the United States. This irrational system lacks a basis in reality. The arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. It is difficult to say but the Electoral College in general was a mistake.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a01bb337eada,3C4368A07D88,I've heard you are deciding whether to require all students to perform community service. I'm aware some students think that community service is a waste of time ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+31010269a8df,3C4368A07D88,I completely support this plan. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+05d8fae3e0fd,3C4368A07D88,Community service is away to interact with other people and helping them out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9daf6864299c,3C4368A07D88,Students will be able to learn new things that could help them out in the future ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f71be308df5,3C4368A07D88,They will also be distracted with better things than getting bored and doing something irresponsible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+499d808854b1,3C4368A07D88,"Community service can help students with that by helping others and not feeling so alone. Like this one girl i knew was so caught up with her studies all she did then was go into her room and lock herself up. Later , when i noticed she'd gone too far i told her to help me clean up the streets that were covered in litter. She did and then from then on she found time for her work, friends, and community service ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e2ff1505e1ec,3C4368A07D88,"Next, do you the saying ""you learn something new everyday."" Well its true with community service you can learn things you never knew before. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b6ae4d67ffe6,3C4368A07D88,"One time my aunt went to a park because of an oil spill and she helped out with cleaning the damage. While she was there someone who knew a lot about wild life taught her about the different species. Later in life we went for a walk and on the streets we saw a snake that looked like a very poisonous one, but my aunt with her new knowledge of wildlife knew exactly what it was. Good thing she went to that park for community service and learned about different animals. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1dfeb44d27b3,3C4368A07D88,"Well some students may get involved with something wrong while they are bored. Sometimes students get into drugs but instead of that they could do something useful. Community service can help keep kids of drugs and do something good.
+
+Of course I get bored all the time but when i do i usually help other people like mowing the lawn, gardening, babysitting and its all fun. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc07b5571e47,3C4368A07D88,So as you can I completely support your plan for requiring students do community service. It can help them for later on in life you never know. Learning new things and not getting into the wrong things is very important. Thank you for taking the time for reading my letter. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e81a2aa9ea61,3C5248E5C9F9,I favor in changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+41b75307be0a,3C5248E5C9F9,"I am writing you this letter saying that I want to change ther election by popular vote for the president of the United States because under the electoral college system voters vote not for the president but for a slate elector, who then turn elect the president. Sometimes the electors vote but the voters cant always control who they vote for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b72faed06b36,3C5248E5C9F9,"Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy so that the popular vote for Kennedy wouldnt have acutally gone to Kennedy. Electors have often occasionally refused to vote for their partys canidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. I think that the electoral college is unfair to voters. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. They said the Electoral college is widely regarded as an anachornsim. Probably changing to election by popular vote it would be more fair to the people than the electoral college. The single best argument against the electoral college is what they might call the disaster factor. When you vote for a presidential candidate youre actually voting for a slate of electors. Thats why i think you should change to election by popular vote for the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68f45f755c23,3C5248E5C9F9,"I think choosing to change to election by popular vote would be more in my opinion because it'll be more fair and they vote for whoever they want and the one with the most popular vote wins, unlike the electoral college that seems unfair to me because when you vote it goes to the electors and the elector then goes and chooses who he wants to pick and he may pick a wrong candidate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4cddb536dc58,3C5248E5C9F9,But i believe if choosing to change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States it would be more fair to the people because they could see by the popular vote. Thats why i believe by changing to election by popular vote for the President of The United States it would be much better for people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a3574312b3a4,3C5248E5C9F9,"Also Electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they have no chance in winning. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+17d32c0117cd,3C5248E5C9F9,Durning the 2000 campaign seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all. Thats why i think you should change to the popular vote for the president of the United states i think thats only fair for the people and the states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b06a811aac0,3C5248E5C9F9,Thats why they think its unfair and outdated and irrational ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d87c9d90c054,3C5CFABBA1F0,"Every four years since the founding of the United States, a president has been elected by the people to lead the U.S. According to source 1, the system used to select the president is the Electoral College. The Electoral College involves voters voting for president they want, as normal, and then the president that got the majority vote in that state gets all of that state's electoral votes. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6856f6e5c9da,3C5CFABBA1F0,"Supporters of the Electoral College claim that it is good that the presidents focus more on swing states, and that they are more likely to be the thoughtful voters, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4f47417b23fe,3C5CFABBA1F0,but there is zero evidence shown to support this ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+001d38a4a0ea,3C5CFABBA1F0,and it makes presidents focus on states disproportionally ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4b30c8a93dfc,3C5CFABBA1F0,The Electoral College should be abolished and replaced by the popular vote system ,Position,Adequate,,,
+751a3bd2ce75,3C5CFABBA1F0,as it is an outdated method compared to modern technology ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+effa3fecab3b,3C5CFABBA1F0,"makes the vote of an individual seem even more insignificant, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a718c54455e,3C5CFABBA1F0,and makes presidents not campaign in states that are small or loyal to them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ad49dbbb03f,3C5CFABBA1F0,"Since the Electoral College was hundreds of years ago, it does not account for all of the new technologies that have been developed since then. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1331c8f67fcd,3C5CFABBA1F0,"The founding fathers could not have possibly thought that it would be possible to easily count all of the nation's votes with a machine, but now it is possible. It is likely that the reason they thought of the Electoral College in the first place was because it would mean that they could spread out the tallying of votes between the states, instead of doing it all at once. Nowadays though, there are computers that can count votes faster than ever imagined. Popular vote is now a viable method since every person's vote can be accurately counted. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+281d3c1ff1c5,3C5CFABBA1F0,"Due to the Electoral College relying on a majority rules system, the vote of a single person can be completely insignificant. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+df91a3501af6,3C5CFABBA1F0,"According to source 3, a supporter of the Electoral College, ""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election...."" This should not be the case when voting. Voters should research their choice as if the election relied completely on them. But instead, there is a system in place where somebody's vote can be rendered completely useless in not multiple ways! For example, if a state already has their majority of citizens voting for president A, if somebody votes for president B it will be as if they didn't vote at all! Even in a case where the state is completely 50:50 on who to give the electoral votes to, if the last person votes for president A, tipping the majority in his favor, according to source 2, ""... those electors could always defy the will of the people,"" and end up voting for President B. The Electoral College is an anti-thesis to democracy, because a citizen's vote can be rendered completely pointless at multiple points. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6e55371b0773,3C5CFABBA1F0,"Both those who support the Electoral College system and those who oppose it agree that the Electoral College puts a much bigger focus on swing states and states with large populations, according to sources 2 and 3 ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+47d0d41580f7,3C5CFABBA1F0,"To put this into perspective, here's an example of why supporting big swing states should not be rewarded. The US has 6 states. 5 are completely democrats and each have populations of 20. 1 is half democrat half republican and has a population of 100(assume 20 people equals an electoral vote). If the republican presidential candidate convinces a single democrat in the big state to vote for them, they will get the majority vote in that state and get 5 electoral votes. This results in the democratic presidential candidate, with 149 people supporting him, tying with the republican presidential candidate, with 51 people supporting him. Simple logic shows that the opinion of 149 people is more important than that of 51 people, so a popular vote system would have been best in this situation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b2dba24aa106,3C5CFABBA1F0,"The focus on certain states is such a popular method by the presidential candidates, that, according to source 2, ""During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all...""Big states and swing states should not receive much more attention per citizen from the presidential candidates than little states do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69d73df654a1,3C5CFABBA1F0,"In conclusion, the Electoral College should be replaced by the popular vote system as soon as possible. The Electoral College relies on archaic methods to make tallying votes simpler for the government, which results in problems. It's like the government is rounding the votes. The winner-takes-all method of the Electoral College can render a voter's vote completely useless, and it even allows representatives to vote for the presidential candidate that is against the voter's wills. Presidential candidates will not bother campaigning in states that are loyal to their adversary or are too small to be worth their time. While a single person's opinion might not seem important, or rounding votes seems ""easier,"" no corners should ever be cut when deciding who the leader of a nation with over 50 million citizens is, which is why the Electoral College should be replaced by the popular vote system.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b561b2f06414,3C80E1F48330,A lot of people lately have been suspicous of my company NASA. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6c324fe4f211,3C80E1F48330,"While I don't agree with them, I do see their side. The general public has all reasons to be suspicious torwards the ""Face of Mars!"" Sounds like something from ""The Twilight Zone. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9dc3a48fbf28,3C80E1F48330,"Well, Mars, though so barren, might has well be considered the earth's twin sister... or brother. The two planet's sufaces have shown some interesting simularities, like water remnants and climates. Not to mention volcanoes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+51c6ef82e704,3C80E1F48330,This is where we find the reason behind the face of Mars! ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c0f7bc8f796e,3C80E1F48330,"On our planet earth, we have land structures called ""Mesas."" These elevated lands are found in the ""American West"", where the surrounding deserts (used to be oceans in theory), are now filled with canyons, rock flats, salt flats, mesas, and other forms only found there. Mars might as well have a northwest region where one could find earthlike simularities ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f9c071554b4,3C80E1F48330,This may as well be the reason behind the face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46572ca99714,3C80E1F48330,"Also, one should note that the shadows may be rocks making a shadow from the sunlight. Another logical explanation to look at France. Shaped like a boot, it is just a land form that naturally occured, looking like something we know. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bcf43794097b,3C80E1F48330,"My company would also like to state that this really ""isn't"" a cover-up. In true fact, the discovery of other life or remnants of one such time would be positive to us, and to our projects. So, say what you want. Believe in what you think, but we at NASA belive this isn't alien. Just another simularity between Mars and Earth.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+595df4f507fb,3C89B5224126,Ugh! Politics are so boring why must we study or do them. But then again there is an upside to it. We get to choose who the president is and how he is going to run the country ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+80d87c7d97c1,3C89B5224126,if we Electoral College vote it would be harder for us to vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+03265ef106d9,3C89B5224126,"it is a process made by our founding fathers and it is established in the constitution. It is a compromise between the election of the president and the vote of the citizens and a vote of Congress. The Electoral College process is long it consists of many sections like the electors, meeting the electors so they can vote for the President and the Vice President, and counting the votes everyone thata voted. The Electoral College comsist of 538 vots but thwey only need 270 votes in order to elect a President. With that amount of votes they can become presidents ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f03349ae6cf2,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Cell phones today are generally used for many reasons. They may be used for texting, calling, emergencies, and many more reasons. Shocking but true, in this day in time, people need cell phones. Some may be against this matter, but do they know everything besides teens texting everywhere they go? Cell phones are one of the major ways of communicating. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6111dcb5a0cd,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Students should be allowed to obtain cell phones during school hours, and also be allowed to use them during free periods. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+41aeaac7c7a0,3CA61DE9B5C6,"First and foremost, cell phones are a major way of communicating. Students may need to communicate with parents, siblings, and other students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+57af5f960b8d,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Calling your parent for a quick minute or two may secure your way of getting home or even to obtain a book you might have left at home for your next class. Also, talking to other classmates throughout your school may give you extra time to study with them or to finish a couple of assignments you were unsure about or needed help on. Communicating with cell phones will provide you extra time to do this by sending a text or giving them a quick call, after all lunch time and free periods don't last forever. This takes less time and gives you extra time for many other priorities you may have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fa803761bb4e,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Also, students need a little free time during the school day. If time is given to them to have their cell phones out and to check what they need to, students may not be prompted to sneak a text in class. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c162b9beb442,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Eight out of ten schools who allowed students to have their phone out at a specific time of day saw a decrease in the number of phones out during class time. Giving students this time will show that you trust them to do what they are supposed to in class. Plus, students may realize administrators trust them to keep their phones off and in their pockets during class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+32d7f428a541,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Therefore, providing trust is a key to students. Showing them they have trust may provide the whole school with many other positive characteristics ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f257da7e2813,3CA61DE9B5C6,"Students may feel they are being rewarded with a little free time by having their cell phones out. If this opportunity is given 99% of students may do better in school. Many may think this just gives students a way to have their cell phones out without getting in trouble for it. However, students are actually very responsible and may do the right thing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+26326f62ea0a,3CA61DE9B5C6,"All in all, changing the cell phone policy will benefit the school in various ways. There needs to be a sense of trust and knowing they have responsibility inside them first. Students aren't always going to do the right thing. However, giving them this time will allow them to escape and talk with friends that they may not see everyday. This new policy will provide everyone with many opportunities that will have a positive effect. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f4d2f92861fd,3CBB0AD46687,The President of the United States should be chosen by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+56d30b6a45c0,3CBB0AD46687,because the electoral college system is unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0eaa7b5370d,3CBB0AD46687,the electoral college system also has many things wrong with it besides being unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a64cfc7833a,3CBB0AD46687,"It is also unfair that presidential candidate themselves can be electors because not everyone chooses the side that they are supposed to chose. Also voters can't always control who the electors vote for either which also make this system very unfair. The fact that winner takes all is the system we use is very unfair to the voter because it doesn't really show true votes only overall votes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23a8864029cc,3CBB0AD46687,Although voting for your candidates electors seems easy you can't always trust other people to do the things they are supposed to you can only trust yourself. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fd0d4f049a1,3CBB0AD46687,When you vote for the President you should be directly voting for him or her not voting for an electoral slate. Candidates should try to win the vote of everyone no matter what not heavily campaign in some states and rarely campaign in others. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4d5ed152265,3CBB0AD46687,This concludes why we should use popular vote.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+35e8089958b4,3CCED3AEEF5A,"doesw the electoral college work?
+
+yes the electoral college works ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+ad2b0265421a,3CCED3AEEF5A,cause it helps people get into a college that they would like to get into or want to it can make them happy and then later on in life they can make better choices to live free and get god jobs and have anice apartyment and other things of that sort much it is for the. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d348ccc1b18a,3CCED3AEEF5A,"''under the electoral college systems voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president if you lived in texas for instance and wanted to vote for john kerry youd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry on the off chance that those electors won the statewide.
+
+the electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the canidxent who recevies the most popular votes the winner the advocates of this potion.
+
+a dispute over the outcome opf an electoral college vote is pooible it happend in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote the reasons is that the winning candidtes share of the electoral invaribly exceeds his share of the popular vote in election for example obama receievd 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes.
+
+cause most of the states awared electoral votes on a winner take basis even a very slight pluerality in a state landslide victory in that state a tie in the national nationwide vote is possible cause then total number of votes 538 is an even number but is highly likely.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+71f856866d9a,3D0919A418E6,I agree you should keep the Electoral College because it a has a major impact who gets elected ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2c6ae009b3a2,3D0919A418E6,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors . A majority of 270 electoral vote is required to elect the president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+06da65977d0e,3D0919A418E6,"that helps the election move more swiffer which helps the people give more time to think , adjust , and prepare ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f96c039e8e63,3D0919A418E6,"because most states have ""winner-takes-all"" they can have for time , unless they just rush it also that includes republicans and democrats . For example In 2012's election Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of popular votes cast for him and Romney because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis even a slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in the state ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+560577e7be0c,3D0919A418E6,"Also they say that the citizens are voting not for the president , but for the slate of elector , who is turn elect the president ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6c056d6a3bf6,3D0919A418E6,Eventhough though that is true and they do vote for a slate most of the time each party selects a slate of electors trust to vote for the parties nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5fb67131e394,3D0919A418E6,I think they are doing a good job ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cd24c06cd33,3D0919A418E6,"cause there has been no complaning , also statistics  , maps , and facts shows who recieved the most popular votes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f950a316269d,3D0919A418E6,"Additionally people are glad well most people are glad who they picked because they're on their side , and plus majority rules and they will just have to pay the price if they mess up . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ef15149dc7dc,3D0919A418E6,So I think you and they are doing a good job and shold keep the Electoral College ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+da8fab877f51,3D6607FA5531,"Policy one: Allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7161a4b8032e,3D6607FA5531,I acknowledge that some students are irresponsible. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2f9fc3ce64ab,3D6607FA5531,Some students choose to put their education before other things. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d2bf42591ef3,3D6607FA5531,Other may not want to consult to their teachers about using their phones at certain periods of time. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ba3f69600a9a,3D6607FA5531,I am a student who would consult with their teacher to use my phone at a certain time or free time ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2f032f3ea23f,3D6607FA5531,"Some may say that students don't care, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5b38578b29bf,3D6607FA5531,but that's not how all students feel. The majority of students in present time choose to use their phone anytime in school during a class. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b09d24deb178,3D6607FA5531,Another reason students should be able to bring their phones is because some students would need their phone at the end of the day to call a guardian or relative for a ride home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44d69e181c18,3D6607FA5531,Teachers believe students shouldn't have phones period because of the unnecessary usage of the phones in school. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2d8126909e75,3D6607FA5531,Education comes before things that are not really that necessary ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff410260f40e,3D6607FA5531,Only some students should be able use their phones. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+60ea60a6d35b,3D6607FA5531,Some students should be able to bring phones also because they should use it for emergency. If a teacher or adult isn't there to help someone or student then a student can call 9-1-1. I personally believe that students who are able to keep their grades positive should be able to bring and use their phones at school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a415162ff555,3D6607FA5531,I also believe that some teachers would feel benevolent. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+12f8f2d44327,3D6607FA5531,There are some of the reasons cell phones should be brought to school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+426188026050,3D7740BCAA23,Keeping the Electoral College would greatly benifit our country.  The electoral process is a very important process that is needed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43384384f054,3D7740BCAA23,"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors.  With majority of 270 votes are needed so there is a good chance of getting a fair shot to win.  Each candidate running for president in a state has to have there own group of electors which eguals out the odds.  The electors are chosen by the candidates political party.  In most states they have a winner takes all system but Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of proportion.
+
+The certificate of ascertainment also declares the winning presidental candidate in the state and shows which electors will be representing your state at the metting of the electors which helps us to know who had won the presidental election.  Voting for a state election of who will turn elected for president. When voting you would have to vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors to pledge for Kerry.
+
+Voting for a president is like voting for a state elector.  Even though a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it has only happened in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote.  The reason is that the winning candidate shares the Electoral College invariably exceeds his shares of the popular vote.  The Electoral college requires an apresidental candidate to have transregional appeal.
+
+The residents of the other religions are likely to feel disenfranchised and that their votes does not count and that the new president will have know regard for their interests.  That he is not really there president.  The winner of all methods of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates like as seen in the election of 2012.  They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters on average and that they will have received the most information and attention from the candidate as the most thoughful voter should be the one to decide the election.
+
+The Electoral College restores some weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constituion.  Having the electoral College avoids the problem of electiong in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast.  It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potental voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, Democrats in Texas for example or Republicans in California.
+
+Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee and is rarely betrayed, however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote than Bush yet fewer electoral votes.  As some would say the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.  The best arguments in favor of it are most likely assertions without much basis in reality.     ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7aaa53112d07,3D91748BFF8D,"The new hit ""the face,"" has made its way through tv, and articles all across the world. This phenonim is about a small land form on the suface of Mars that takes the look of a face. There a million hypothesis of what it could be, but we have found what it really is. With research we found a logical reson to how we are correct. Some think its from aliens, and some think its just a natural land form but what is it? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5ff9bab6c42b,3D91748BFF8D,"Incase you have not heard the ""face"" has been spotted on Mars, a small landform with some facial features that make it look like one. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e3300b9e322,3D91748BFF8D,"But a face from an allien, that sounds, and is unlogical. We have done so much reasarch towards this landform. Shadows give it the look of a face, and thats why we can only see it sometimes. In fact mission controllers even said you had to capture it at the correct lighting. But, if it were a real face, you could see it anytime. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8df38561d4f,3D91748BFF8D,"In fact we have logical evedience, there are gigantic storms which would have wiped all the alliens out. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6caff5016451,3D91748BFF8D,"They would be burried way benith the suface, becuase when Mars has a storm its vicious, and moves dust, dirt, and sediment all over. If there even was alliens they would be covered in hunderds of pounds of dust.
+
+Yet I can see the opposing side saying that since the dust moves around so much how come the bodies couldnt be revealed? This is hundreds of pounds of dust ontop of them. Even though the dust moves so much, there a 1 and a million chnace of it moving above 400 pounds of dust. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+067ac7726a73,3D91748BFF8D,"In conclusion, this phenomim gives NASA the attention it wants, but its not true. While some might think there was alliens were on Mars, its illogical for their heads to just appear. Even though the opposers think its possible, they are dead and cannot move. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+34bffaad20ae,3D91748BFF8D,Therefore the face is just a landform with shadows that make it look like a face. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6bddb20aba01,3D97B580A127,"I think we should change to election by popular vote because so that everyone can vote, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+87062c8c592d,3D97B580A127,"but in the passage ''The Electoral Collage process consists of the selection of the electors,the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president''. They are trying to say that the president only get majorirty of 270 electorals votes but i think if every each person vote like the house of representative and plus two sentors it be a equal number then it will be easier for him so for my oppion  we should change to eletion by popular ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b647a338f5f,3D97B580A127,"Well each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. for example, the electors are generally choosend by the candidate political party, but state laws vary on how the electors selected. and did you know that when u vote for president you help choose a elector because when u vote for them u voteing for your candidate electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7bd6bba663f2,3D97B580A127,and before we have won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60 precent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c07628f2c7b5,3D97B580A127,"so now i am saying reading the passage is very cool with facts telling me what i should pick  but i think by reading it we should change to eletion by popular vote for the president of the u. s. a. so they can choose who should be our electors or candidates ,and rather than people who think a single vote may decide an eletion.      ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+346b1a53f8d2,3D99FC2386BD,that people can still steer and accelerte and slow down with just sensors and you can use half of the fuel and aloowing better response aand reduce power from the engine and the sensors make the car safer to drive . but it may not be safe to drive computer driven cars because of malfinction and that can be dangerous and they have to wait to make sure that is is reliably safe to drive it may not be as easy as they make it seem. sometimes the driver has to take over to pull in and out out of driveways to be on the safe side but the driverless car runs on electrical cables wich may not be safe that runs through radio signals to the front of the car. This may be alot of work to just drive a car beacsue of smarter roads and they need a whole lot of sensors on the car but they are still waiting on the law. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+961f0b5d93e9,3DBAD6F954EB,"I stand with the makeing of these cars and the possiblities that come with in our society. The cars would be able to open new doors to health benefits, lowering crash ratios, and much more. The driverless car would be a great achievement in human curisosity and invention. These cars would better many different levels of society if made and used propely. ",Position,Effective,,,
+991455dad8c0,3DBAD6F954EB,Drverless can be an innovation within our cumminties and cites. These cars could protect more lives and lower the amount of human recklessness that could be done at the wheel of a regular driven car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a41bf1c92240,3DBAD6F954EB,"If made fully driverless, the amount of intoxicated accidents, killing and pull overs by the police would be lowered substancially. These smart cars could detect when their driver is not keeping a minimal amount of focus on the road and alert them to any dangers that could obstruct their path or cause harm. Only increasing the level of safety and efficencess that it would be used for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8bd56cbd25ca,3DBAD6F954EB,"The support of the driverless car ,though at the moment is not completely driverless, could keep many citizens safe and out of harm. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+93b65f97c093,3DBAD6F954EB,"The public eye sees these cars of dangerous because they do not wish to relinqiush their right of control over to the car and also they do not know what would replace the fun of driving in its stead. The makers have a few ideas on how to make the trip fun, but still lawmakers are trying to decide whether to trust that these cars are really that safe and how big their laws would ned to change for traffic, and the last big question who will take the blame for a crash that may happen. The safety issues are slowly being proven to the lawmakers on that it may be a better option then regular cars, but the other previously said descions have yet to be acted upon, except for its questioning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e992b08c873f,3DBAD6F954EB,"I do believe driverless cars if thought through and corrected for mistakes can become a valuable asset to modern day community. These cars could lead to a increase in driving, and traveling for families and could also lead to the question of what can we do with this technology now? I feel that these questions are a very good thing in the advanceing technology of this age and that the still developing cars should not be frowned upon, but seen as a step forward into atoumating our country. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ae5c8c3b1af8,3EBF97F2F31A,the face on mars. Many poeple say the face is a alien landmark ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e7ff468bf8c2,3EBF97F2F31A,"it is just a natural made landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+593c4b860325,3EBF97F2F31A,What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalnet of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American west. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96890b2d83d8,3EBF97F2F31A,""" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the snake river plain of idaho,"" say Garvin. ""that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on mars. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c833b721c11,3EBF97F2F31A,"So on april 5, 1998, when Mars Globsl Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars oebiter camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a jpl web site, revealing... an natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4095262d0fc9,3EBF97F2F31A,"A few days later NASA unvield the image for all to see. the caption noted a "" huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+afc86f87e093,3EBF97F2F31A,This is a great explanation for the way the face looks. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+953e7f97ec06,3EBF97F2F31A,I say that the face is just a natural made landform. There is no evidence to show other wise. With the better camera we were able to find out that its not an alien atrifact. So yes it is not a alien atrifact.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+066d38bc5769,3ECD274709E5,I believe that we should be aloud to have phones during lunch because well people have them out anyway. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+449d1d901e2f,3ECD274709E5,Were also kids we love to text and sometimes talk to our parents or grandparents or someone like that. Some students may also be shy to talk to the people who go to our school. Its just something that takes some time to find out ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e0eb821f1ab,3ECD274709E5,I also agree that we shouldn't because well harassment could go on or people could tell there friends to bring a gun or something to school or even drugs. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+adc56e5ee2ad,3ECD274709E5,"Yea it is fun to have our phones out but we don't need to focus our lives on phones some people around the countrys aren't lucky enough to have phones. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1527a335d376,3ECD274709E5,I say people shouldn't waist there time on phones get out and do something. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f53501c2cbc2,3ECD274709E5,There are allot of people who cant move a bone in there body we should be thankful we can. God gave us gifts one of my gifts is softball and gymnastics those sports i love doing but you cant do them with a phone in your hand. well you could but it would be hard of dangerous. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7df96703d036,3ECD274709E5,Phones have got ton me in trouble may many of times ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4767f023257c,3ECD274709E5,One year i was playing softball worming up the pitchers arm for the game i didn't have any gear on not even a face mask to protect my face well my phone rang in my pocket and i was so exited to see what it was. So i looked at the text well the pitcher didn't know that at the time she pitched it and it hit me right in the eye knocked off my glasses and gave me a black eye. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+16702ebfe262,3ECD274709E5,"So, i mean there are many good things about it and many bad things you just have to be smart about what you do ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+309be073f194,3ECD274709E5,Many people already text in school but teachers done know that and yes there has been rude comets on them but its part of life. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cb78c51005b5,3EFA3EE80C51,"Community service is a great way to help today's communities, and also a way to meet new people. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+758eef71229a,3EFA3EE80C51,"However, not all people would want to do this. I personally think that community service is a volunteer job and that people of the community should do it at their own free will. Depending on what type of services the students would provide would vary the response in enthusiasm. My opinion to community service would be that every one needs to do their share in helping. ",Position,Effective,,,
+e0b782600704,3EFA3EE80C51,"Most students are very compatible and can be convinced to do something that might not sound fun or appealing at all; but when it comes to adults putting in their share, they normally don't have the time to do so when they have work. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1c8f24f9964d,3EFA3EE80C51,I think its up to the youth of today to keep our communities in good shape. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d1da9a18efc,3EFA3EE80C51,"Maybe after school programs where students and friends could get together and have fun either cleaning up or help younger children or elders. Snacks and trips could be given and make community service less than a job and more of a hobby. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cdf8be720bda,3EFA3EE80C51,Requiring students to do community service would get things done faster and more efficiently rather than asking them to do it on their own time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7bcb4dac740,3EFA3EE80C51,"For example, if you ask a random student, ""Would you like to help me pick up trash?"" they are most likely to say they have something better to do. If they were told they have to, it would get done and if you added something that is entertaining to that person they are more likely to come back and help again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6eddcbf38ffd,3EFA3EE80C51,Community service can be done by any age group ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0b91660ca62,3EFA3EE80C51,"Taking a group of 7-8 year olds to a park to pick up trash would be one of the simple was to teach the younger age group that their a part of this community. Later they can go play on that playground and enjoy themselves. 10-15 year olds could help teach the younger group or head out with their friends and help out at the schools, any age higher could do the same ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bdc25b1c28b,3EFA3EE80C51,"There are many ways to help, and many people to do the job enforcing students to do that job would be an complete positive to our community. I think when i get a chance i will do community service within my neighborhood and with my friends. The smallest of jobs can make a big impact. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ba405aa866a0,3F0A465CBE35,The students of your school as well as I think you should go with policy 1 and allow cell phones during lunch and free times. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+76f4bd4c143e,3F0A465CBE35,We think this because when there is lunch that's our time and when there is free time that is also our time. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8ccb5333e89c,3F0A465CBE35,"During our time means that we will bother no one and do what we feel is fun, just like you would do what you want on your free time. Cell phones will cause no harm to your school , should they be put away properly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+647ef02bf3bb,3F0A465CBE35,Cell phones during free time can be very helpful to students in predicaments where they need to call someone for an predicament ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86c8491708ec,3F0A465CBE35,"A student needing to call home for or projects
+
+A student needing to call for an emergency
+
+A student who needs to call home for notes
+
+Or simply a students who needs a little happiness because their down ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+649dad349c67,3F0A465CBE35,"These are some of the reasons why cell phones should be allowed during lunch and free time. I hope you understand from a students way of vision and see that these are very important reasons why cell phones should be allowed during lunch and free time. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea746966cc93,3F15318ECD44,The Electoral College is point less. If the govenment wanted us to vote on the president then why have a college that does that for us? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+1ec4496d01a1,3F15318ECD44,"The Electoral College needs to be abolished, so that the peolpe of the U.S.A can vote on the president for real. People want a derect vote not just to sit and watched the peoson that they voted for not get elected becuase of a College that has all the ""power"" ",Position,Effective,,,
+0a9beaa15524,3F15318ECD44,It makes no sence that we vote for people that vote for us. If I wanted to do it like that i would move to Canada. insted of letting people having the right to vote they get to watch someone vote for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f74992678667,3F15318ECD44,In the early Amrican history we needed it but now we do not. You see now we have TVs and smart phones. We are feed information every second of our lives. The news is on every street corner ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce9b39d5355e,3F15318ECD44,People in the Electoral cCollege sometimes go rouge and vote for the other party ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e8dd91cf99f,3F15318ECD44,Back in the 1960's Kennedy almost was not elected because of one state that state Louisiana ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+6d7fdd44cb66,3F15318ECD44,You could argue that it takes time out of the election or that it helps Amricans ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+72003ba04e8b,3F15318ECD44,Our country prides it self on one thing freedom. Then we dont have the right to vote derectly on the peorson we want. So how in the world does that help us? ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fa9da05eb66e,3F15318ECD44,"People make up lies and stats all the tiime to get where they want but the never do good. Let me put it this way would you like someone taking care of your faimly whale your away driving your car, kissing your wife making the dissions then when you get back you act like it does not happen? No you would probable freak out yeah. You spend years makeing these system and trying to let the people be what they want but systums like these do not help on any level. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+720afb0b67e8,3F15318ECD44,People in every state vote. Somemore than others. They vote for there party most of the time but when you have people that make big name dission fot the people it takes the power a way from us ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cedcc35cda0,3F15318ECD44,I watched a very moving movie last night about a man who survided his contry by being a soldier and his comrads gave there lives for this freedom. They want this country to have all the rights for all the people. Not just Ellectors. It affectall of us people get cheated and scandaled out of money from politics all the time this one way that they do it ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d41457d22f6,3F15318ECD44,States like California have 55 representitives they could throw the vote them selves just by sending all of one party group. that could ruin a vote and a election. We need to stop the Ellctoral college form making more mistakes. We need to have derect voting ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e1a7ec15c6a,3F1A4C0C773A,"The electoral college needs to be kept, it is the easiest way to vote for a presidential canidate ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3dac2db7f6e,3F1A4C0C773A,"People may not like it because the people who are voting for a president really are not voting for the  president, their voting for the electors to vote for the president. Which makes sense ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dff3336ff909,3F1A4C0C773A,but the electoral college is simple and yet very reliable in many ways people dont see. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8c59994a7d1e,3F1A4C0C773A,The electoral college is based of popularity in a state. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5ecc3c78dd68,3F1A4C0C773A,"I  can see why people dont like that because certain states like florida has the maximum of 29 electoral votes, but wyoming only has a maximum of 3 electoral votes. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+da1f7e6df6c8,3F1A4C0C773A,"The presidential canidates look for states that have the most electoral votes, but they also need more votes than the other canidate so every vote counts. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+88cafbfde8c3,3F1A4C0C773A,"Citizens may think that the canidates dont care about their state, but they do in more ways than you think ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+52575dee2e57,3F1A4C0C773A,"The electoral college has a requirement, trans-regional appeal, which means that a canidate is popular in a certain region of the U.S for example, Mitt Romney he was the most popular in the south in 2012's election. Romney did not canpain heavily in the south so he did not gain any electoral votes by increasing his popularity in the states he knows he would win in. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77a8bf62395d,3F1A4C0C773A,The electoral college is definatly something to argue about but in my opinion it should be kept. The Electoral college may seem a bit unfair but its also the most easiest desion making tool when it comes to electing. Its been around for years it would make no sense to get rid of it.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2cbdfb0d39e7,3F4D8262235A,I think students would benefit doing school at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e1a2a42f2e31,3F4D8262235A,"many kids maybe going through problems at home and could just be tired or maybe just annoyed of to much problems. Students working from home is good for kids that could be getting buliud either they speack up but dont see a change, having problems with adults here at school that don't really help much but just bring the student down, or maybe just being an anti socicl person ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+080191bafc6d,3F4D8262235A,"Online school is something really seroius to look into if tyour dealing with problems at home having so much stress in you and cant deal with more stress of school, or you just simply need to work to help out your family it could be a chance they need money but cant get enough to get bills paid and need help in paying them,maybe you dont really have time in showing up to school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7db77eca23b5,3F4D8262235A,I think online school is a good choice for many students that could have problems at school and not seeing a change ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e21783c71ead,3F4D8262235A,Students wouldn't have to get up so early in the morning having to look presentable or anything just having to have a good schealue that works good for both work and school. Both online work or video conferencing are good for kids that have their ways in learning like as in having videos chat with a teachers. Students can be fast learners just by reading insturstions they got it memorized and having the work ready in less than an hour. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+420fe6455931,3F4D8262235A,Others students are more to a visiual learners that have to see work getting it explaned to many time for them to undersatnd the work some students are slower than others ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58510460bfca,3F4D8262235A,Online school would be the best choice to many students that just have it the ruff way and not easy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1449e06c2c36,3F4D8262235A,Other reason is because many kids get sick really easliy and its better to keep those kids away from others in getting sick ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74644dd5ac8b,3F4D8262235A,Online schools can really make a big change in kids that are just not ready have more stress in them and wouldnt have to deal with more problems with parents or maybe getting bullied ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ca3171e06b9,3F4D8262235A,Oline schools would make a big change in those kids lifes in a positive way.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff4206419b7c,3F59617806D4,Can you believe that there is a face on Mars! ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7046bcefccbf,3F59617806D4,The Face on Mars is actually not a face but a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+69e73928114f,3F59617806D4,the facial features are just shadows ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53c9f7d402f4,3F59617806D4,"there isn't any real proof that aliens created it, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d5440bdf7a1,3F59617806D4,scientists have research that is proof of it not being alien-made. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3bb58c5de29,3F59617806D4,The first reason is the facial features are just shadows ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e95549d7fad7,3F59617806D4,"It would be nice if it was actually nad by an alien. Sadly, it isn't true. It is proven that it is actually just a huge rock formation. (Paragraph 3) ""The authors reasoned it would be good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. (Paragraph 3) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a6eacf77c88,3F59617806D4,"Secondly, there isn't actual proof that aliens created it anyways. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+76f183eea2ec,3F59617806D4,"There isn't any proof that aliens are even completely real. It is said in the article ""Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze."" (Paragraph 8). So, they do not have any actual real proof. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33e9ff8a5b19,3F59617806D4,My last reason is that scientists have done research to prove that aliens did not really creat this face in Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+794af2b4eef8,3F59617806D4,Scientists had seen this photeo in the winter of April '98. Someone would have to peer through the camera through wispy clouds. (paragraph 8). ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf9812518730,3F59617806D4,The reasoning for believing aliens did it is that people want to believe. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a9f343c22a3e,3F59617806D4,They want to believe that another race of people can exsist. Maybe the aliens are jsut sending a message that they are real. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76ea1ec62664,3F59617806D4,"You can belioeve what you would like to. I believe that the face is just a landmark because the facial features on the face is just a few shadows, scientists have done research on this case, and there isn't really any proof that aliens created it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e9aff610c27c,3F8C4D2CA16E,Hey people of America do yall agree or disagree with me? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1a546e3b34d8,3F8C4D2CA16E,I think changing to election by popular vote should chose the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+783e140b4b7a,3F8C4D2CA16E,Because electoral collage are not always one hundred percent right ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65d0f87ced38,3F8C4D2CA16E,the electoral college dont vote for a president but they vote for a slate of electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50e10356d01f,3F8C4D2CA16E,my last reason is that the electoral college might nominate a bad president for the United States of America. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46b4e5ef2e75,3F8C4D2CA16E,To start my argument off is that my first reason is that the electoral collage is not always a humdred percent right and we might end up with someone we dont want. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6777edff4366,3F8C4D2CA16E,for example say if Jhon Snipes is running for president and he has a bad criminal record and he only got twenty percent of the votes and the other canidate had the majority of the vote and Jhon Snipes won. He would probley turn the United Sates into a war zone. See this is the main reason why want someone president and barley no one voted for him os her ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4f264f66ef8,3F8C4D2CA16E,Another reason is that the electoral collage dont vote for president they vote for slate of electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab6420bda764,3F8C4D2CA16E,This is bad because slate of electors dont speak for everyone. They might like someone that we dont like and give them the power to run for president and probabley win. so this was another reason why the preseident election shouldnt be picked on the electoral collage. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e244a5948d87,3F8C4D2CA16E,My last reason is that us the people of the United States of America do not want no scum bag of a president that does nothing what so ever to our country ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6f1678f326e0,3F8C4D2CA16E,"We want a president that is smart and will take care of tha United State, we want a president that will make us feel safe with the decision that he makes, and finally we want a president that we can believe in and that we trust in. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+390ffec1878b,3F8C4D2CA16E,I gave u all of my reasons why i thunk we shouldent have an electoral collage casting the votes ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5f2c877e3ac6,3FA1D435DD1A,"Changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United State is the best way to select the prisedent, because people has right to pick any prisedent for them selve. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f4e3674a7f03,3FA1D435DD1A,"popular vote for the prisident is fair way to vote, there's no cheeting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a092e5ed854b,3FA1D435DD1A,"I think that The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+13f688eeaee7,3FA1D435DD1A,"because winner got to take all system in each state.
+
+it's also dangurios for all the people in US.
+
+If the winner got to take all system in each state, then he able to do anything he/she wants. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a25ebe187b22,3FA1D435DD1A,"It's like a disaster factor, and the system allows for much worst. and consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors. that those clectors could always defy the will of the people. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5c779e64ed4,3FA1D435DD1A,"on electorall college system voters vote not for the president, but for slate of elector.
+
+people vote for president, not for slate of elector!!!! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f39553f934e,3FA1D435DD1A,"electoral college may cauge trouble, it may mess up the system,   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3f1d448f38a7,3FB024B6D050,I think the policy should allow us to have cell phones. There are certain reasons why. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+88f260d72426,3FB024B6D050,But i also think that if students get carried away using them until the fact that they use them during class ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a33bb37a879c,3FB024B6D050,that they should take them away from the people using them at that time and return them at the end of the day. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dcd5a62c0e2e,3FB024B6D050,I would love the chance to get to have my cell phone out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7648d0075fc6,3FB024B6D050,Lots of people get sick at school and need to go home. Some people stay in the restrooms and call or text their parents to come get them but the calling noises always bring attention to teachers and you usually get it took ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc994884276f,3FB024B6D050,If your sick and have no way to call your parents from the office then you should be able to call or text from where ever you are. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+926e23ff4484,3FB024B6D050,But if it comes to a point where people are skipping class to go text then they should take that privilege away. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dd9c2d880ba8,3FB024B6D050,Almost everyone has a cell phone and love to text their friends. But when it comes to the no cell phone policy at school well trust me I understand ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d884741616ad,3FB024B6D050,hours without calling or texting is like a day without happiness. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7af1f61babde,3FB024B6D050,"You hear all these other kids calling and texting in class but don't get caught, then you try it and you get caught and your phone gets took by the teacher. You could never understand why that happens so of course you feel like your trapped without your cell phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed788d6d49c8,3FB024B6D050,The no cell phone policy is unfair in my opinion. We all love our cell phones and never want to have to put them up. This is why I am agreeing to the policy allowing cell phones in free time and not in class. No student likes to give up their cell phone. And I completely understand them. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8f3819b6d5ad,3FD462C874BF,"The near future holds numerous inventions that have seemed to be impossible.
+
+Ideas that were once dreams have now become reality.
+
+Driverless cars are just one of these various inventions. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f1053f842b63,3FD462C874BF,"Coming in the next few years, driverless cars offer a safer, smarter, and more effective way to travel. ",Position,Effective,,,
+73730b8cea41,3FD462C874BF,"Driverless cars promise highly-advanded technology to provide safety and security for the passangers while allowing the human driver to ultimately remain in control. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+1ef17b3f359f,3FD462C874BF,"The driverless car is a smarter car that requires advanced technology in order to drive successfully.
+
+Some pieces of equipment include a video camera, a GPS receiver, and multiple sensors.
+
+The most important part of the driverless car is the spinning sensor located on the roof.
+
+By using laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model, this sensor allows the car to recognize its surroundings.
+
+These sensors will also detect and respond to unexpected dangers such as rollovers or skids. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f60f20f7a60,3FD462C874BF,"
+A driverless car is safer and more efficient. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d6140f9f8cb6,3FD462C874BF,"With all of the driverless car's sensors and alerts, it is able to detect the situtation around it.
+
+The car will be able to sense other cars, pedestrians, and landscape obastacles.
+
+The driverless car will also be able to handle road situations better than a human would.
+
+Since 2009, the driverless cars have been able to navigate over half a million miles without a crash.
+
+Along with the car's safety, it is also more efficient than a normal car.
+
+The driverless car would use half the fuel of today's taxis and allow more flexibility than a bus, making them the ideal mode of transport.
+
+Even though it is driverless, the car also requires human control.
+
+The driverless car will be able to steer, break, and accelerate on its own, but it will alert the driver when the situation requires.
+
+The human driver must take over in situations such as navigating construction zones or accidents.
+
+Even though the car is not completely self-driving, it allows for the human driver to ultimately remain in control of the situation.
+
+With the driverless car's ability to analyze and respond to its surroundings while allowing human control, it will be the safest and most efficient car of the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+20465fdfe7c7,3FD462C874BF,"The new-age technology provided in the driverless cars will make for a smarter car with the ability to be aware of the road, cars, and people, as well as any trouble that happens unexpectedly.
+
+This technology also creates a safer drive while being efficient to the passengers and the environment.
+
+With all of these self-driving features, the human driver will feel in control when navigating the required situations.
+
+All of these technological advancements lead to a promising future of driverless cars everywhere. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a1e68d936b26,3FDC2CD9FB9F,"The face on mars is not caused by aliens, that is upcerd ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6e486eeffcc0,3FDC2CD9FB9F,Aliens wouldnt make a face on mars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+90bfd43857a4,3FDC2CD9FB9F,their is no such thing of them doing so ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa03adbed108,3FDC2CD9FB9F,"The face you see on mars is just a detailed rock formation that formed by natural causes, and also the eyes, mouth, and nose are just shadows caused by the formation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03820f4fe0a0,3FDC2CD9FB9F,"Aliens would'nt accure on mars to make a mark, if they were real they would be much farther then mars. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bf0de1ffd59b,3FDC2CD9FB9F,This landform has been their for over 18 years so the odds are not aliens but erosion on the planet mars. Back then itwasnt seeable but now it is due to these erosions. If their were alians that made the formation People would've already be talking about the alien sightings. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26b855e8dcdb,3FDC2CD9FB9F,"This is why the formation was not made by aliens. Also any aircrafts, small shacks, or airplains would be able to be seen in the picture due to the pixels in the camera. The camera would be able to see anything that goes on mars. All of the details that you see is just shadows from the rock That makes it look like it has eyes, a mouth, and a nose, and thats why the face is a natural land form and not made by alens. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+78bfb606b80c,3FDCA0372760,I strongly believe that changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United State. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+37cbf1ba3044,3FDCA0372760,may increase the hopes for more people to vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b107fe7295e,3FDCA0372760,From the passage one of my sources I choose is Source Three called In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner. My second source is Source Two called The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of  the system are wrong  by Bradford Plumer. I believe that sources two and three will get my point across of why changing the election by popular votes for the president of the United States be changed. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e652a1a9922f,3FDCA0372760,because it tells us how a map shows a breakdown of the number of electoral votes given to each state. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bb6d875011bb,3FDCA0372760,the Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism a non-democractiv method of selecting a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f94526a202d,3FDCA0372760,"The Elecoral College method is not democratic in modern sense , however, it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4d390531224,3FDCA0372760,"reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President is the Certainy of Outcomes. In 2000, a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote was possible ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+20232d479fab,3FDCA0372760,"but, was less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. For example the 2012 election, with Obama received a 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to Romney vote 51.3 percent of the popular vote cast. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c9f94e73e7fd,3FDCA0372760,The people should be able to pick there president and so forth. Electrol College dont have nothing to deal with the people on who should be president. The Electoral College stand on there on bases of being part of something that belong in the past not the present and just giving candidates plurality. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b05a18ba77cf,3FDCA0372760,"one of my example for picking this reason is because Richard Nixon, Jimmy, Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, that they all agreed on abolishing the electoral college ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73b66a4c31bc,3FDCA0372760,"adding that they are not alone, thanks to the quirks of the electoral college winning the popular vote but lost the presidency, over a 60 percent of voters would of perfer a direct election to the kind we have know. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1e24f426e14,3FDCA0372760,"under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8dc946a76ed2,3FDCA0372760,"Who pick the first electors in the first place? I know the answer to that it depends on the state. Its sometimes the states conventions, the states party central committee, and the presidental candidates themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e764bd5e47fb,3FDCA0372760,"unfair voters because of the winnere take all  system in each state, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac90ce6208fb,3FDCA0372760,"candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chances of winning and focus on the tight swings states that they may have a chance in. Its offical the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. This is why the electoral college system is wrong. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c01518ccc0bd,3FDCA0372760,"To Conclude, State Senator  I strongly believe that if changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United State is due to the people choice and not the Electoral College changing the election may increase the hopes for more people to vote. Source Three that is called In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner, and Source Two called The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of  the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer. I believe that sources two and three will get my point across of why changing the election by popular votes for the president of the United States be changed.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6bb8cf1ac34a,3FF0FB7E93BD,I think that students should go perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+30cbc85a399c,3FF0FB7E93BD,It will give these students a good education and idea or what he or she would like to do in life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d72150b35ee0,3FF0FB7E93BD,"Weather is would be tutoring elementary school children, or help clean up liter for the Earth to become a better planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8aadd7b2760c,3FF0FB7E93BD,Community service would be a thing to get your mind off of things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+441ea8666d17,3FF0FB7E93BD,"And if you have a sport you could go after that sport, or before that sport to perform community service. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf8b7a6b9a97,3FF0FB7E93BD,"If I were you, I would let the students choose for them selves. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fd2cb2af77d7,3FF0FB7E93BD,If i was in this position I would choose to do community service to get to know a little about what i am learning. Our community is very important for helping our environment by cleaning up and recycling everything that needs recycled. Education is good it will show you what you want to do before you start you job you went to college for. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+651e5e731423,3FF2F530D590,I favor keeping the Electoral College in the arguement. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0012dc59115f,3FF2F530D590,One of the reasons I feel that way is that it is harder for someone who is runnig for president to win. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+847dfacafbc4,3FF2F530D590,To win they would need to win over the votes of most of the small states. Or win over the votes over some of the small states and some of the big states.  So it would need someone who is smart or at least somewhat smart. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+394e862e0119,3FF2F530D590,Another one of my reasons for going on this side of the arguement is not only do they have to win over the electoral votes they have to win over the poularity votes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2c8cf5769cb4,3FF2F530D590,The next reason I have is the Electoral College requires the people running for president they have appeal to all regions and not just the west because they were born there or something like that. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01c6e998b6d3,3FF2F530D590,Now there are a few bad things about the Electoral College. Like one is the fact that a tie is posible. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+79e114a9bc01,3FF2F530D590,"Another is that it's out dated. Lastly each party picks a slate of electors to vote for the party's nominee and it's posible that trust can be betrayed, but that's rare. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5c7676406aaf,3FF2F530D590,That is what I think about the Electoral College.                    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+68615a2553be,403B4FFD6CA4,"I think that the Electoral College is a bad way of picking a president, because as Americans , we have the freedom of speech and that should include voting as well ",Position,Adequate,,,
+75043f57614a,403B4FFD6CA4,The Electoral College allows the electoral votes to be given out by the voters and the population in that state may never actually honestly choose who they want in office ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9ec65a26ce1d,403B4FFD6CA4,"in other cases itthe presidential canidates have  more intrest in the bigger states such as Florida. that could boost in the jobs, and advanteges in the bigger states. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+10f063524283,403B4FFD6CA4,"In defense of the Electoral College , it can be a faster way to elect a new president ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b0920ec08476,403B4FFD6CA4,"it also allows people to lose intrest since their votes don't effect much in the long run. the votes of the people should effect who should be in office because with what I know about the Electoral College, it could break a country. It takes away freedom of speech. But helps the canidate(s) from your state , which can possibly help your state in the long run . ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+91b0941b1ebf,403B4FFD6CA4,"The popular votes allows you to choose who you want to be in office and if the person you voted for lost , at least you had your vote ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cba0566d9a9,403B4FFD6CA4,You can easily have had you vote given to someone and they could have had cheated you out . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aeb79660e6b1,403B4FFD6CA4,"If the Electoral College is kept going then there should be some changes to how it is done. For example , the small states have less say in what happens compaired to the bigger states like California and Florida . It should balance out so that it can be fair but also equaled out. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7d0859171834,40B094686B62,"I think you should change the whole ""
+
+Electoral Collage
+
+"" and have election by a popular vote instead. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e58124ec77b2,40B094686B62,"It would make much more scence instead of the whole Congress blah, blah, blah, and stuff. I mean I know that this was created by our Founding Fathers and should show respect, but popular voting won't take as long and much faster too ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8b739b214414,40B094686B62,"It states that in the article on paragraph 3, the first sentence , ""
+
+The Electoral College consists on of 538 electors
+
+"". Thats a lot of people. But when people try to vote for you, they are actually voting for the candidate's electors.
+
+""
+
+Under the Electoral Collage System, when voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for the slate of 34 Democratic electores pleged to Kerry
+
+"" (
+
+Par. #10, Sent. #1-2).
+
+""
+
+The Electoral College is what we might call a disastor factor. The American people should be lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in the century; the system allows much worse
+
+"" ( ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+567144ad697b,40B094686B62,That is why I suggest making a popular vote in stead. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+13831c0d9a4f,40F436B62E66,"I disagree because, one all most every kid loves their sports if its watching it or doing it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a46c12b7aed1,40F436B62E66,not every kid is as smart as a B or better average grade some can only get a C- or better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a89712370e6c,40F436B62E66,"I know im only as smart as a C- average. So i say they should only have to keep there grades up at a C- or better to play any sport. Well look at them all most every kid has a C average so why not let them have a C average and be able to play in sports or other activities. If they have a B average then that's great but if they have at least a C average then that's good to, so don't you think we should be able to play sports or other activities if we have C` s? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2abc720740e,40F436B62E66,"If everyone had B `s then we all would be as smart as each other and most likely get the same points on a test like everyone else, then the teachers would question if we cheated or not even though we didn't we just new the correct anwsers. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+69acad6639fc,41144C19B669,"The president of the united states is one of the most powerful political leaders in the world and controls the faith of one of the wealthiest countrys on the planet. There have been many discussions on how to elect the president of such a great nation. The Electoral College,  the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. If its worked for over 200 years why change it. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f069b47d54c7,41144C19B669,The Electoral College provides certainty of outcome and avoids run-off elections and should be kept as the form of election of the U.S. president of our state. ,Position,Effective,,,
+0756349d9014,41144C19B669,"To Begin With, the Electoral College has been used for more than 200 years and our state is fighting for another 200 years of electoral college. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+453a6bd8d4ef,41144C19B669,"In an article by Richard A. Posner called ""In Defense Of The Electoral College:Five Reasons To Keep Our Despised Method Of ChoosingThe President"" he states ""there are...reasons for retainig the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigree: all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons.""  Amongst these reasons one of them is the certainty of outcome and in source 3 paragraph 18 it states that ""A dispue over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible-it happened in 2000-but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reasons is that the winning candidates share of the popular vote."" Richard Posner is stating that Electoral College is more effective because it causes less trouble and does not need to be disputed unlike popular vote which needs to be disputed because the winning candidiates share of the Electoral college invaribly exceeds his share of the popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+33ade10af442,41144C19B669,"Furthermore, The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dd94dbe33cbf,41144C19B669,"In an article by Richard A. Posner called ""In Defense Of The Electoral College:Five Reasons To Keep Our Despised Method Of ChoosingThe President"" he says ""nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College (301 and 370). There is pressure for run off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; the presidential election process, is reduced by the electoral college, which invaribly produces a clear winner.""    ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8df9f3c2afe8,4155D50399D1,I Believe that cell phones need to stay at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+20b582d1bda7,4155D50399D1,"in order for students to get a good education they need not to be distracted by devices such as a cell phone, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+113391e07d56,4155D50399D1,"Students in this school should have they're phones left at home because on a test day a student forgot to study him/her texts a friend who already had that class ask him/her for the answers, and that right there is cheating. In order for students to get a good education they need to be well aware of the material in each class study for exams, test etc. and so further more if the students are distracted by they're phones the Teacher who is Teaching that class shall take up the students phone and keep it for five days with a policy of five days at the end of five days they must pay fifteen dollars to get it back. Another reason would be if students are not educated enough and they fail the TAKS test your school will be the lowest in education and there for we the supreme independent district will have to fire you from your current position as school principle. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3952d76c46e,4155D50399D1,"""PLEASE READ WITH CAUTION!"". ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2356308f959a,415672DB1873,The policy you have are very nice. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9ef250d86b55,415672DB1873,i agree with both policy but if i have 2 chose it will be policy # 1. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+25b04e4324a3,415672DB1873,all though cells phone distract students from the work in class room and many other reason ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b32eff5f0dfe,415672DB1873,i would really perfume we do have our cells phone in school. and i am not just saying this b. cause i am a teenage and i am a student in SCHOOL_NAME ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+63660ec9a335,415672DB1873,i am saying this b. cause we have all day with our phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e75652f5c482,415672DB1873,"while we are in our classes they will be off like policy # 1 said in the first sentence ""Allow students to bring phones to school"". in the 2 sentences ""as long as the phones are turned off during class"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65474623fb48,415672DB1873,i know for a fact kids may disobey this rule ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8367e453b7b1,415672DB1873,but it dose not hurt 2 TRY. but if the student phone continues 2 turn on and off there is a possibility the phone will get messed up by turning on and off . ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e9194732c1dd,415672DB1873,if there was an other policy i would have 2 say put our phones on lock or sleep or when we attend our class we put them in a box and when class is over we will get them back. but like i said i agree with both policy. A lot or students may agree with this policy just b. cause it have has 2 involve cells phones and we just want 2 use them cells phone are good in some ways 2 bring them 2 school and in other ways they are not every body has there own opinion. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74635a204e82,415672DB1873,"Thank you STUDENT_NAME
+
+for listening 2 my opinion on this cell phone rule in our school! Different rules, different school, different student, different teacher, and different opinions. ;) ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c1f29d80ab3c,4171CB7DF807,Theres two diffrent type of ways to vote for election. There is electoral college or voted by popularity of people ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fe8611c1c79f,4171CB7DF807,I beleive citizens should vote for there president so they can have a right on who to vote on ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ad246362d2eb,4171CB7DF807,"Electoral college is a only voted by congress according to Richard Nioxn,Jimmy Carter and Bob Dole the U.S. chamber of commerce and the AFL-CIO all agreed on Abolishing the eletoral college. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+08ea85f29284,4171CB7DF807,2. Eelectoral college is voted not for the president its voted for the slate for example if you lived in texas for insurance and wanted to vote for Jhon Kerry you have voted for a slate. Richard A. Posner Electoral college is widely regarded as non democratic method for selecting a president. From this method u can avoid run off elections or Big states. I beleive that this method is not the best. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2835b7647e33,4171CB7DF807,In conclusion citizens should have there rights to vote on who they want to be president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1ebd7c355e2,4171CB7DF807,3. citizens voting on who they want to be president is more rights for us ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8957bf2f34d8,4171CB7DF807,There is some negative for letting people vote for who they want president like citizens voting on a horrible president or have run offs were not that many people vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+44fe9d5d03ca,4171CB7DF807,I beleive this is a more efficent way to get votes from citizens. In conclusioun over 60 percent prefer a direct election to the kind we have no ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+453bd99fc1d6,4171CB7DF807,4. I belevie that citizens voting for who they want is better than electoral college over 60 percent people vote for citizens having there own rights. At most basic levels the electoral colleges are unfair because many candidates dont take there time. In conclusion voting for your president is better.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cc111887b420,4178B01DEEC6,I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bce696659e95,4178B01DEEC6,That is the way we did the voting for years and why would you want to change that. The outcome of that might be a disaster because we haven't used the popular vote to decide a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8236b39f03cf,4178B01DEEC6,The first reason why I think we should keep it is because when we vote for the people that represent us they have lots of experiance in the politics area therefore meaning they have a better idea of who would be a better president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12a9a96de95a,4178B01DEEC6,"They have spent years learning all about politics so the ""most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.""(paragraph 20) In paragraph 16 it says ""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee."", also meaning that the people we select to represent us is trusted people that will have the same vote as you for the desicion of president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c6dd4e5be78,4178B01DEEC6,My second reason of leaving the Electoral College is because if the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise then it should be left alone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca3e0cabdd0c,4178B01DEEC6,Others might say that its a bad idea to have the Electoral College ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a369003d7564,4178B01DEEC6,but if thats how the system is set up then it should not be changed because if it does change then maybe everything would be different. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+80087523e34d,4178B01DEEC6,"Paragraph 15 says ""The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c4b233713480,4178B01DEEC6,"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a mordern sense... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people."" therefore going back to my first paragraph that is why you select people that you trust. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18422546f3ea,4178B01DEEC6,My third and final reason for my choosing is that the certainty of outcome is reletivly high ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed1cd7ebae41,4178B01DEEC6,"Like in the 2012's election . for example, Obama recieved 31.7 percent of the electoral vote copared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes. Also in that same paragraph (18) it says that because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-ote victory in that state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e25db97a7a9,4178B01DEEC6,Mr. State Senator i think it would be best if we just left the Electoral College method alone.             ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+67cbc319e646,417C226944D6,"""A new president, really, How many votes did they win by?"" If someone were to ask you this what would you say, thirty electoral votes? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6a6f67a70910,417C226944D6,"The ""Winner-Takes-All"" system is flawed and needs to be either fixed or completly taken down, and here are two reasons why ",Position,Effective,,,
+a65881cfeaee,417C226944D6,"First a president should be chosen by the people, seeing our county is a democracy meaning that we elect representatives to rule for us, a popular vote fits the sene a bit more than an electoral vote ",Claim,Effective,,,
+62b9aff1cec7,417C226944D6,"Secondly if there was every a tie in the electoral college it would catostropic because intead if being in the peoples hand it be in the representatives hands, aslo known as the ones who already have power ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4fa1743e6210,417C226944D6,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. because of the winner-takes-all system in each state canidates dont spend time in states they spend no time in stats the know thy wont win."" Some states can get no canidates out and its because the electoral college is unfair. ""It`s official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best argumants in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct election ar spurios at best. Its hard to say but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college!"" This Quote states that the electoral college is not fair and down right rediculus ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+baa265fca073,417C226944D6,You may say since its getting the job done and there has been no ties whats wrong? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b06c1dcefa95,417C226944D6,"there are manny thing wrong startign with popular votes can lose to electoral votes, also some states can get on people to come and campagne ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+402d455b2efa,417C226944D6,""" In 1968 a sift of just 41,971 could have cause a tie in the polls."" in this article just that many people and the representatives could have chosen a president and the reason this is bad is because they will get a president that will do what ever they want. ""If there were just 5,559 voters in ohio and 3,687 voters in hawaii that went the other way the electoral college would have tied making a representative choose."" "" in this article just that many people and the representatives could have chosen a president and the reason this is bad is because they will get a president that will do what ever they want ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d9351625a1d5,417C226944D6,"So to finalize The ""Winner-Takes-All"" system is flawed and needs to be either fixed or completly taken down, and here are two reasons why. First a president should be chosen by the people, seeing our county is a democracy meaning that we elect representatives to rule for us, a popular vote fits the sene a bit more than an electoral vote. Secondly if there was every a tie in the electoral college it would catostropic because intead if being in the peoples hand it be in the representatives hands, aslo known as the ones who already have power. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+75dbe3892707,418DC4AC10FA,"
+I think that you should keep the Electoral College because people want to vote for who they want as president ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e6f902652378,418DC4AC10FA,"People dont just want to have anybody as president they want to have someone that they thinks knows what they are doing, they want to vote for that person to become president. They vote for the slate of electors who in turn elect the president. You should keep this going because when I get older I want to vote and im pretty shore that theres other people who want to vote when they get older to. You should keep the Electoral College going. Another reason is we want to have a president that we can trust. We just want to vote for who we want to. We just dont want anybody to be president. The Electoral College is a non-democratic method so there may be know reason we should shut it down. Please dont shut the Electoral College down, you should keep it going and not ever shut it down. Everything else about the Electoral College is good ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+feb5359908fb,418DC4AC10FA,This is my letter of why we should keep the Electoral College going and I hope that it will keep going. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f05148974d47,4193E47EE1D8,I believe that performing community service would be a great idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eee672b0dc47,4193E47EE1D8,Because it can one show responsibility to the kids ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+657af52d8d58,4193E47EE1D8,"by showing up for there job is asked to be done when you are required to do so. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bc3a1b909a7,4193E47EE1D8,"Next reason why is because your friends , they want to say forget about that and come hangout but while you are with your friends you can get into trouble or do things you are not suppose to do. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+77377a24ded2,4193E47EE1D8,"Also , community service would be a good idea because it can also show kids how to treat the environment with respect , ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c44611ddcad,4193E47EE1D8,"for example no fighting , talking to others with disrespect ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3070e60969d6,4193E47EE1D8,"Another reason why community service would be an great idea , because you can show other kids that are younger then you some responsibility and leadership ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b39d41c699b7,4193E47EE1D8,"for an example if you are doing community service and other kids laugh because its hours of work , well while your doing community service those kids can be getting into trouble for the stupidest reasons. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f07668a75871,4193E47EE1D8,"Lastly , community service can be another way to be safe and peaceful in your neighborhood. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+39e4ecdf296a,4193E47EE1D8,So i think that community service is a great idea for our young teens to perform . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+57a2064bbc81,4195C11B8348,I do not agree on how the election is happenening or how it is run. It is very unorganized and not very fair. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3a5565eaa16f,4195C11B8348,I think if the votes are close then everybody should vote again not just one person outta ten people the state has to choose. Also it is not done professionaly like it is supposed to be. Some people deserve a shot at it but no you guys think that the presidents from the last election should be put back in well no because that same guy who won it last year has the chance to win it again and its not fair if he wins it again. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c57e90e45b91,4195C11B8348,The first reason i disagree with the way the election is done is that it is not done fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0104dd12ad90,4195C11B8348,The first thing is that everybody should be able to vote the second time not just ten people from each state. If those five outta ten people choose the same then that state wont count and thats not fair at all. Some of the people outta the ten that were chosen either didn't vote the first time or they have no idea what they are doing what so ever and they could possibly mess up the system or they could mess up the votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce2b01a38d01,4195C11B8348,My second reason is that it is not orgonizes at all. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7657571a093b,4195C11B8348,First they chose ten random people to vote in the second round of elecion. They won't give anybody else a chance to vote during the second election. MY second most important reason is that in the first election their are more than twenty people on the ballet and now the second election only has two people on the ballet i think theor hould be atleast three or four on the ballet. My last reason is on how they vote for the people of he second election. The way that they do it is not fair they send out a list with twenty names or more on it and they have to check at least two names and send it back and then they count the votes and then the fist ten for each state get to vote for that state do it is like a drawling and they even send it to the people when theor name is on the ballet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9c1e4e73842,4195C11B8348,"
+My overall reason is that it is not done professionaly like it should be. The same people should be running for president again especially the one who won before because he has another shot at winning again. That means that they change to many things. Like the school food and drinks the food is now healthy and the drinks are diet some kids and teachers have to have sugar or they will not do so good through out the day like if the have diebetes they might need some sugar well they wont get it because all the food is healthy and the drinks are diet now.
+
+Those are the reasons why i dissagree.           ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0e698442000e,419C8EFADABA,Students should take community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c0829afd4f71,419C8EFADABA,because it will take away time from learning in class and not enough time to finish any work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb6eb968a031,419C8EFADABA,Some teacher say this is good because teacher want there students to go take care of there community ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f33bff1a4483,419C8EFADABA,but education is more important because it will help u get into college and help make money to support your family. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+152cedb88b55,419C8EFADABA,on the other community service is good because it help makes a better community and a better life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a73168bf56aa,419C8EFADABA,"parents wants there kids to go to school because they want there kids to have a better education then, them when there were kids and have a better life. so they don't have to do or find there way around things. parents want there kids to have a easier life. if students don't go to school this there is no reason to even have schools in the first place and just clean the community every day like its a job and don't get paid at all. its better to go to school because when you get to you are paid to go to school. not like its free and you want or you don't want. now this days students, will do anything to get out of class and out of school. students would fly school because they want to give away there one and only chance to find a good job. they would even try to get in trouble and get sent home and there parents don't care if they do that or even if the teacher calls them and say that ur kid however some may say that community is better because it keeps the community a better places to live but some teachers and parents disagree with this because teachers are like your second parents and they want u to go to school then do community service. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92a80ce01401,419C8EFADABA,some may say that school is important because its good that students have a high education to get there degree. that is way people been going to school and that way the community have school and the main point of have school is to help students. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3ef1264a13e,41F94D05D278,"The Electoral College is a process which the founding fatehrs established as a compromise between election by a vote in congress and by popular vote. The Electoral College con sists of 538 electors. 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. This is a way of how the votes are calculated in the United States.
+
+I want to change the way that this voting is held. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+12f834b0e577,41F94D05D278,It is not fair for the electors to elect the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dd0f34ab2ba4,41F94D05D278,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, canidates dont spend time in states they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the swing states. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07e924cdd8bd,41F94D05D278,"It should be on the peoples votes since they are the ones being affected by the changes. Not by the Electoral College.
+
+The winner-take-all system is not fair what so ever. If there are more votes foe whatever president in that state then the electors will go for that president. This is like bandwagoning for football teams. If they go to the national championship they will change to that team. This voting shopuld change to the peoples votes instead of this winner-take-all system. It is more fair and balanced.
+
+Think of it this way in 2012 that more people voted for Mitt Romney but the electors didnt think so that is unfair. Right? The voting needs to be changed once and for all to a popular vote system instead of the Electoral College. This is the best way for the United States to deal with this madness. One solution and you are one step forward to a better Nation. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d031b0a38d07,41F94D05D278,The Electoral College may have been in better use for the past but now it is the future and we need better ways for voting. We need to go back and use popular vote instead of Electoral College. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+410668f961e9,4244E78D4368,we should keep the elctoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3ef79866fa6c,4244E78D4368,"we should keep the electoral college is because, there is a reason on why it is there in the first place. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c3b48db241e,4244E78D4368,"Im not that smart but im pretty sure the founding fathers knew what they were doing when they started the electoral college. it is there because it helps pick who is president and vice president. I mean sure we do help by voting but there job is to pick the best one, by compareing statistics. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cac0b6f16409,4244E78D4368,we should keep the electoral college is because the people arent always right. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fc4b75e9726,4244E78D4368,"take for instance the George Bush we messed up big time by electing him, look what happened to the economy, but that is what we get by letting the peple pick. Im not saying that we dont know how to make a right descion but can we please let the professionals do what they do best. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1639d4e3c5d0,4244E78D4368,"they do elect fairly  the bigger thye state you have the mor represenatives you recive, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3a17f71175a,4244E78D4368,"states like California,texas,wyoming,ect which means the bigger the state the more people sre going to live in that stae which would also mean that you would have more represenatives. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1e01d3b098a,4244E78D4368,your saying how is that fair if just because you a bigger state you get more represenatives? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+59f3c84d2cdb,4244E78D4368,it is because of population. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4ae91d5e6f75,4244E78D4368,because of population to even out the votes you would have to have more represenatives. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc6d4894c835,4244E78D4368,Those were my top three reasons on why we should keep the electoral college. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9fe5e58bad68,4288F88C8D15,I think if your good and sports you can participate in sports ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+637ca746e69e,4288F88C8D15,"But you atleast have to try to do better at school. Because if you don't them you can't participate in sports like compate with others school or team. It so cool because, one time I compate with other school in baskteball and voleyball. But we lost In voleyball but in basketball we won. I was So happy because you get so exited and then nervous because then you think that your going to lose but you never know ig you don't try. So I think that if you have a C or B you can still make to the team or do some sprots. When I won I was with a C avarage and my coach. Didn't care she put me because I was good. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a349b4cb23e0,4288F88C8D15,And that what I think principal so please don't change the rules. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38d4774949d4,4288F88C8D15,"And if i want to do and acticity well if I have a C than, she atleast can check my conduct in class. Or maybe some student don't have a B avarage they could got and C and they could be one of the best. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7787997a8574,4288F88C8D15,But the pricipal want to change the rule right. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+31980da00c2f,42B977C6E77F,I think Policy 1 would be a better policy then Policy 2 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e278c55d4cb,42B977C6E77F,"Policy 2 is a good policy to have at a school, but Policy 1 could be easier and safer. Both of the policies are a good thing to do for the school, but sometimes Policy 2 could be a lot harder to handle at a school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46a169480b90,42B977C6E77F,Policy one would be a good policy because some kids do need phones at school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdab4ed821b0,42B977C6E77F,"Some kids might walk home, and if there is an emergency they can be able to call whoever they need to call. In some cases, the child could be staying after school and the mother might have forgot and the mother would've been able to call. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe0131f29e3e,42B977C6E77F,Policy 1 is exceptionally fair for kids too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abb395a554dd,42B977C6E77F,"kids can have their phones on during lunch but they have to turn it off during class. If kids turn their phones off during class there wont be any disruptions and everything will be okay. Another thing about Policy 1 is that if people respect the rules and don't text during class they wont get their phones taken away as much. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6a47385cc34,42B977C6E77F,Policy 2 would be a good policy too ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8bb5a33748be,42B977C6E77F,but not as good as Policy 1 ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+055cb9fb4edc,42B977C6E77F,"If kids walk home and have an emergency, what are they supposed to do? kids should always have their cell phones with them just in case something bad like that happens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4453c471d3e4,42B977C6E77F,Also if there aren't to be phones at school then kids would try to sneak phones into school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fa0f82ef8ad,42B977C6E77F,If kids sneak phones into school a lot more kids would get in trouble. So it might be more stress on the school and the teacher to look out for phones instead of not paying attention to what they are teaching. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4dffe476b867,42B977C6E77F,"Like I said before, I do think both of the policies are good, but which ever one is better for student and their safety should be better for the school. Policy 1 would definitely be a better policy then Policy 2. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+69261633aea5,42C45E57A06D,My opinion is that we be able to vote saying the most popular votes win because why would we give are opinion and stating it if it doesn't matter ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ebe47df648f7,42C45E57A06D,"Well according to the 1st source the electorial college process consists of a selection if the electors wich is were they go and have a big meeting of the electors and who is gonna win President or vice president, They look over the counting electoral votes by the congress ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a735289316a7,42C45E57A06D,I think having the most popular would be better because then most people wont get mad or cause problems because they got to say who they want so its not picked by other people stating that there opinion doesn't matter when really it does. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+489d918519e2,42C45E57A06D,"people get to pick who they want by why pick it if you dont pick he most popular vote ,because what if we dont like what you pick ? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1d8f545ce856,42C45E57A06D,"under the electoral college you vote for a state of electors witch meaning you would be voting for the state and the electoral college would vote for president you wouldn't , voters in hawaii and ohio were 3,687 voters had voted the other way. The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8c2531382b2,42C45E57A06D,at the most basic level the eletroral college are unfair to voters because the winner takes all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d00f099f6561,42C45E57A06D,"what do they mean by winner takes all ? why cant they share half and half its not fair that all the other people running trying to protect and help are country and do all these things dont get any sort of winner thing, to me that is unfair we have people that wanna help and protect us and you say winner takes all i think we should at least share with the other people running ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d6693aed341,42C45E57A06D,they say in the paragraph 'everyone's president a solid regional favorite such as romney was in the south has no incentive to compaign heavily in those states  for he gains no electioral votes  by increasing his plurality instates that he knows he will win wich meaning he is saying he knows he will win ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc0648e742b8,42C45E57A06D,so thats my opinion we should have the most popular votes win to see who will be president and vice prsident.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2ec7f0df1ca1,42D8CCA3643E,"Imagine having to attend school, go to work, be at sport's practice, and do many other activities all in a spam of 24 hours. Well, many students nowadays have extremely busy schedules and have to balance many responsibilities on their shoulders at once. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+93bd7fabd849,42D8CCA3643E,"Although some students will miss out on the opportunity and experience of physically being present at school and going through their day with their fellow classmates, many students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home ",Position,Effective,,,
+dab1df53da72,42D8CCA3643E,each student's priorities ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7a446f4d4ab2,42D8CCA3643E,health ,Claim,Effective,,,
+88a010b7d665,42D8CCA3643E,personal matters differ. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1d2e9fe555c9,42D8CCA3643E,"To being with, each person on earth does not have the same mindset and concerns as another. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c83f7b5055b9,42D8CCA3643E,"Everyone has their own desires and values in life, even students. Though one may be attending school, they could also be wrapped up in another area of their life. Many students enrolled in schools right now do not only just focus on schoolwork, rather they are involved in many out-of-school actives. For example, students model, dance, make videos on the internet, and participate in travel sports. Having such a busy schedule, being able to get one's school work done outside of school can be very useful to many, because then they can try their best to fit everything into their schedules at any time or place of the day. All in all, having the work done, rather than not, is more beneficial to both students and teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f307cb356a5f,42D8CCA3643E,"Adding onto getting work done, many students prefer working in an environment special or more comfortable to them. One major reasoning for that is one's medical conditions. Nowadays, many public schools offer a special education program, but to many, the system might not exactly meet their requirements. Many handicap students need special transportation, seating, and feeding, which schools may not be able to provide. They also require alert attention at all times because anything could happen to cause them discomfort, pain, or even to fall down. Other students going through a health issue may find schooling at home to be rather more comfortable due to the same reasons. At home, the students will have their family members to look and care for them. Besides the staff not being able to properly handle students in need of altunitive care, the, ""regular,"" students attending the school can also be an issue. Kids of today are not the nicest and love tearing others down on their insecurities. Bullying could be a serious concern to many special education students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a18d61bd991d,42D8CCA3643E,"Overall, one's health plays a huge role in one's schooling and place of schooling. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bd948fcdca4b,42D8CCA3643E,"Along with students personal concerns, there are many problems that can arise at the homes of these students them to miss school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ec9cc97ff7f3,42D8CCA3643E,"School is one part of student's lives and some only have a limited amount of time they can put towards that one part. Many people struggle with family matters and are not always left out of them because they attend school. A student might be going to school everyday and as soon as they get home, they are taking care of another member in their family or cooking and cleaning. Many kids run their households because their parents are not in the right condition to act their part. This leads to students working and schooling. All those things take up a big portion of time and can cause much stress on the individual. Also, many times, students just fall ill out of nowhere, and are in such conditions where they have to stay home and rest. Having access to classes online and available to them at any given time reduces much burdens off their shoulders. No one really knows what goes on in student's lives outside of school, so the opportunity to attend classes should be permitted. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3b651820385b,42D8CCA3643E,"In conclusion, students would be able to benefit from being able to attend classes from home for many reasons. Their schedules, conditions, and personal reasons are all apart of this matter. If classes are not available to attend from home, many students will have lower grades due to concerns they can not help nor fix. Give students the right and privilege to do school work outside of the school building!  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d50dec3840c4,42F0BEBB42B4,I do not think that students should be required to do community service. I believe that it should be a choice but only under certain circumstances. ,Position,Effective,,,
+338ff3c6ceee,42F0BEBB42B4,"If they choose to be in a club or any other school activity that requires them to do community service then they would have to or be kicked out of that club, if not then they should not have to. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+69cd396d736b,42F0BEBB42B4,The only reason that a student should have to do the community service when they are not in a club is if they got into some kind of trouble at school or during something related to school/on school grounds or if they accumulate so much detention that they don't make up another choice should be community service. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1f64e4db0ddc,42F0BEBB42B4,Another reason they could do community service is if they want to help out the community but not because they have to do it as punishment or to as curriculum for a club. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+be6388e9816c,42F0BEBB42B4,One of my examples is that if people that were on a soccer team or any other team did something that got them in trouble and they would not be given detention for is they could do community service instead. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7a66867b65ba,42F0BEBB42B4,Another example is that if a student had accumulated over 24 hours of detention and it was close to the end of the school year or a dance/ field trip that they really wanted to go to was coming up they could just make it up with the amount of community service that you and other faculty members decide is fit for the circumstances. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+1fcc8fc3f016,42F0BEBB42B4,My final example is that a student could have a friend that is having trouble with math and they want to help their friend they do community service and help their friend with whatever he or she would need help with or if they see a park that is full of litter they could help clean it up. Maybe doing that the student could get extra credit to help their grade if they need to push it up a little. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b107f9536611,42F0BEBB42B4,Those are some of my reasons that I think a student would have to do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d31de24edb6b,42F881EA857A,The electoral college been around for a long time. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+87ea64e2e603,42F881EA857A,"Some of the states don't like it, because most states doesn't even see the campaign. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+131e7c3ed5df,42F881EA857A,Sometimes people don't really know who there voting for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+836e6d0e7431,42F881EA857A,when the candidate promiss may be the compleate oppsite once there president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc7dc7b50efc,42F881EA857A,"More of the smaller states aren't to happy with the electorial college, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b404ed2b00dc,42F881EA857A,Because of it the canidates dont want to go to the smaller states. They would go to the bigger states so they would have a bigger number of votes then with a smaller number. Thats why the smaller states are up set with the electoral college. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ab5a14cb9b1,42F881EA857A,When the canidates become president after getting all the big states. They dont do what they promiss ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+713d6f0f4b02,42F881EA857A,"What people thought who they picked was all for change, and just makes their own rules that not helping,but hurting everyone is why the smaller states are up set about it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+204c6a7e4692,42F881EA857A,The electoral college needs to change ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e5fb50da081a,42F881EA857A,their not being fair to the other states that only have a few people living in them. They could of make a difference in what the out come is. The electoral college been aroud for a very long time. They need to come up with a new way to find our president.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dc29562cbf8e,4316B5E2B308,o my god. what is wrong with you? didn't you hear about the football team? no what? you have to have a grade b average to play. are you serious? i wouldn't joke about that. but don't you have a grade a average? yeah but the guys are really upset. there saying i worked hard to keep a grade c average. maby we should write a letter to the principal. yeah i already no what we an say. ok good i need some ideas. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cedda6f45256,4316B5E2B308,ok we could explain to him that a lot of us are have real trouble. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0d8004a6281,4316B5E2B308,like we don't understand. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a8bf7d14023f,4316B5E2B308,half of the team only is doing so good because of us needing a c average and i don't no if they can get the b average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e30eebc92e59,4316B5E2B308,so they would have to leave the team and go write back to getting worse grades agene. there parents were so proud of them and they were really starting to get there live back on track. now its all messed up. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7eba56cfb5b,4316B5E2B308,maby when i right this all down he will change his mind. i hope so. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d38b67724105,434616FBA2C7,Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Online or video conferencing is when students and teachers communicate through long distances through the use of technology. Students would be able to learn without the need to be in a classroom with other people. This would are able to help them learn more frequently and function more with the help of this learning capability. Students would be able to personally talk to teachers if there having trouble with work in class. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+b661e7b98a88,434616FBA2C7,The opposition incorrectly believe that with the help of online or video conferencing students will benefit less from being able to attend classes from home because students would be less social and they will not be able to gain communication skills. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d99870332b16,434616FBA2C7,"Although some believe with help the of online or video conferencing students would benefit less from being able to attend classes from home, it should be known that with the help of online or video conferencing students would benefit more from being able to attend classes from home. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+b6e3c410e8e4,434616FBA2C7,"With the help of online or video conferencing, students would benefit more from being able to attend classes from home due to benefits for oneself. Having access to online or video conferencing would more affordable for students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ad65dd91395b,434616FBA2C7,"They would be able to talk to teachers without the need of them spending their money. For instance, there are certain websites where students can learn and talk to teachers without them going to school. Nowadays, if a person would want to go to school but could not afford it, then they would use online conferencing to talk teachers without them wasting their money just to go school. Through the help video conferencing, students would be able to have personal conferences with teachers. If there are having trouble with their work or if they feel like they need help, then a conference would be a good way to better themselves. For example, if a person did bad on their test, exam or just want to help boost their grade up, then they would have a brief conference to see why their not doing so well. With the help of personal conferences, students can be able to improve their grade and better understand what their not good at. Students would be able to get their work caught up at home. Online chats will be able to see what that person missed. For instance, if a student missed a day or a lesson, then that student would be able to contact their teacher and get their work caught up. This is useful for students, who are sick and cant make it to class, because they wont be behind and they can get their work finished. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4b48f8972d09,434616FBA2C7,"With the help of online or video conferencing, students would benefit more from being able to attend classes from home due to benefits for others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cd6d37385d82,434616FBA2C7,"Online conferencing would help students not to get sick by other people. Long distance conferencing would lower their chances of getting sick by others. For example, if students lived in China, where the Corona virus is spreading at, then they would communicate with their teacher online without them catching the virus as well. Online conferencing in today society would play a major role in helping both students and teachers lower their chance of catching colds or diseases. Students would not have to travel long distance to just go to school. With the of online conferencing, students can learn what they need to know at home. For instance, if a girl was pregnant and she didnt have no one to take her to school, then she would just talk to her talk online without the need of her leaving home. With the help of this technological advantage students, who cant find a way to get to school, would be able to learn in school without the need of them leaving their home. With the help of video conferences, the productivity of students' work would go up. This would help students who dont understand the work and what to know more. For example, if students dont understand the assignment they were given, they would be able to learn online with their teacher to better understand. With the help of this learning tool, they are able to learn at a better pace. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0cf77d6b1aa0,434616FBA2C7,"Even though some believe with the help of online or video conferencing students would benefit less from being able to attend classes from home, it should be understood that with the help of online or video conferencing students would benefit more from being able to attend classes from home. Opponents incorrectly believe that with the help of online or video conferencing students would benefit less from being able to attend classes from home because they might not have WIFI to communicating to their teachers and they might not look presentable when talking to their teachers. However, with the help of online or video conferencing students would benefit more from being able to attend classes from home because they would be able to get their work caught up with, it would be affordable for them, and students would be able to have personal conferences. Furthermore, with the help of online or video conferencing students would benefit more from being able to attend classes from home because they would not get sick by other students or teachers, they would not have to travel long distances to attend certain classes, and students would be more productive. Online and video conferences are new way for people to learn at home without struggling. They are able to learn in so many ways and can talk to their teachers if there is any confusion. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a088d2d718cc,436CA2153EB6,I believe that election by popular vote for the president of the united states is the smartest and easiest way to go about things. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a00ff1a702e,436CA2153EB6,There are many people who believe that it is the better way to go about things given that the electoral college is a waste of time or so some may say. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b1bbbdc41cc,436CA2153EB6,Over sixty percent of voters back in two-thousand would have perferred a direct election instead of voting to a bunch of electors. I mean would you rather vote for one person or vote for twenty-six. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41d8dc00ab19,436CA2153EB6,"The electoral college is a place that the founding fathers established in the constitution as a compromise between the election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting, where they vote for president and vice president, and counting the electoral votes by congress. The college consists of five hundred-thirty eight electors and a majority of two hundred-seventy votes is required for the election of a president. Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d2da960f395,436CA2153EB6,"Under the electoral college the people vote not for the president, but for the slate of elector, who in turn elect the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b45a1a352c2f,436CA2153EB6,The electoral college is unfair to the voters because of the winner-take-all system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce622b53ed20,436CA2153EB6,"During the two-thousand campaign, seventeen states didnt see candidates at all. Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of commerce, and the AFL-CIO all have the same thing in common, they want to abolish the electoral college. Some electors even have the nerve to occasionally refuse to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5baaf7fd7188,436CA2153EB6,So i hope that explained alot on how the electoral college is not a good way to vote. That way is to long and people might not get filled in on what happened or who won or there vote might even get changed. One of these days the electoral college will be gone and it will just be the president winning by having more votes. We dont need all that confusing way of voting just a simple vote and the winner is the one with the most votes. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a186b35b53e7,43AF502C49E6,"Education should be a school's top priority, and part of having educated students is having students that are as knowledgeable as they can possibly be. Each kid has different subjects or activities that they excel at. Some may do well at math while having trouble in English, and others may be good at soccer but not so good in History class. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a0c80a4923dc,43AF502C49E6,"If you change school policy and make it so that students can't participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a B average, you are preventing students from being their best at what they do or in other words, being knowledgeable in their activity. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d3e0c945bcfb,43AF502C49E6,Preventing kids from participating in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average will hinder their progress in improving their grades. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e602c8138b32,43AF502C49E6,"Staying involved in physical activity has proven to improve test scores and health for that matter. The health of my classmates should be very important to you considering that a sick student cannot attend class. Kids with excess energy will not pay attention and that is why sports teams and physical activities are incorporated in every school. Taking that away from kids with a lower average than a B will not improve their grades or help them gain knowledge, instead their grades will most likely start declining more with the short attention spans in class. Therefore, decreasing the knowledge that they take in and making them less knowledgeable. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+55f66b81ca55,43AF502C49E6,"You should always encourage us students to try our best, and what if our best is at a sport? Taking away the right to play sports because of low grades will take away our effort in trying our best. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+de8d5f19b630,43AF502C49E6,"Having a low grade in a subject that we aren't specifically doing well in, shouldn't prevent us from playing a sport that we excel in. We try our best in everything we do and it wouldn't be right to punish us by taking away an activity that we can excel in. To most of the students, sports mean everything to them and taking it away because of one bad grade will make them feel like their best didn't work so why should I keep trying. It defeats their self-confidence and willpower. This will make them slack off in class and therefore, decrease their knowledge. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19561f35d9fa,43AF502C49E6,"I think that it is in your best interest to not change the school policy so you can have better, more kno ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+66e39f49a5e6,43CBE96B374E,i think that we should keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2b6d0e13c704,43CBE96B374E,it keeps things in order ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4e53b5fa3cf,43CBE96B374E,people get to vote on which thing or person they want to be president or vice president and without it people couldnt run nor vote for who they think would be better at running office ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b9216fa1d8b4,43CBE96B374E,they have already had it in why take it away now ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76ce17ce41bd,43CBE96B374E,keeps things equal and right ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d13cfc1699e,43CBE96B374E,to all american citizens of the united states of  people wait for every four years to be able to vote on the people they want in office and who they want vice president the one with the most votes is president and the one with fewer votes is vice if there is a tie between the to then they have tokeeo running till one gets the most votes and the other is vice preisdent over 60% iof voters want a direct electon and the rest dont that is over hafe who want it  the elcetoral college is widely regarded as anachronism a non demoractic method  of selecting a president not the people but each party is selected a slate of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee and it is entirly possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not wine the national pouplar vote there are five reasons for retaining  the electoral college despite its lack of democratic pedigree all them reason not liberal but it is less likely than a dispute over the pupoler vote canditdates share of the vote is possible . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9654b17cf444,43CBE96B374E,i think that the electoraal college is to stay and give the right to ther people all over the world and every where elese in the world the electoral votes it what lwts us speak are minds and us have the right of freedom and equalness over the entier world ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+707252de6902,43EC1533429B,I think you should allow us students to use cell phones during lunch ,Position,Adequate,,,
+12ea4df8c3d6,43EC1533429B,its our free time and we just wanna chat with friends and family ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7698ff38be2d,43EC1533429B,i know we are not allowed to use our phones ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+88cc2dc55b33,43EC1533429B,what happens if our family have a emergency and they need to get in touch with they son or daughter they can call or text and tell us was going on ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fa3d6e94702e,43EC1533429B,but now sense we can use our phones our parents have to call the office and get in touch with her or him. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e96a6b70c0d6,43EC1533429B,I know you don't like us using our cell phone ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2198a12a9ea8,43EC1533429B,just give us a try to see how it works with us students. and if you don like it you can change it back ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a79c94445d4d,43EC1533429B,I think that would be a very cool idea if you let us do that. our cell phones are very important to us students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0d6fb134367,43EC1533429B,"i guess you don't realise it but its ok but we just need our cell phones to keep us busy while we are on our free time. and as soon as the bell ring to go to our next class we can turn off our phone but if you see our phones and we are using it u have the right to take it away. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d534973f508,43EC1533429B,Well I really think you should give us a try and see if it works but if it do it could or maybe stay that way. but I really think you should give us students a try and see if we can listen to the rules that u provided to us about our cell phones. and I know some of these students listen and some don't but if u try maybe something will work out for you and us students. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+18f1e7750e7f,43FA2AEEBD18,Here at NASA the Face on Mars is known to be a natural rock formation. However some people believe that the Face was created by aliens. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8d8eabe587c0,43FA2AEEBD18,"We are attempting to prove that it is natural. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+2dd83fbd402f,43FA2AEEBD18,The Face is a natural rock formation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be7580796ee3,43FA2AEEBD18,"Evidence such as a picture taken on April 8, 2001 shows that it is nothing more than a mesa which are common in that area of Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+527ce070fd45,43FA2AEEBD18,The picture was taken with a camera that had a higher resolution than the camera used by the Viking 1 in 1976. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4a17768334fd,43FA2AEEBD18,"The pixels in the image had a closer meter spread at 1.56 meters per pixel to the Viking 1 with 43 meters per pixel causing more of a blur effect. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+552db8b0089a,43FA2AEEBD18,"Others say that the Face is an alien artifact. They say that us at NASA are covering up the fact that there is life on Mars. Another thing they say is that on April 5, 1998 when the Mars Global Surveyor took pictures of the Face the alien markings were hidden by the haze due to it being winter on Mars at the time. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a1cd1e605354,43FA2AEEBD18,The final thing to say on the matter is that the Face is a natural rock formation. The Face was not created by aliens. The pictures prove that it is natural. The fact that us at NASA say that the Face is natural doesn't mean aliens created it. Conspiracy theory disproved. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8dd4f6d46dc1,44079A5EEDDE,I would like to take this time into explaining why having the Electoral College is not a good idea in determining who would become our president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ac77ac798a9,44079A5EEDDE,"Why should anyone be voting if in the article it states
+
+""
+
+It's offical: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b6958de5fa3,44079A5EEDDE,"If the Electoral College is irrational and outdated, then why do we keep using? Popular voting can be a better idea then using the Eleortial College, with the popluar voting we can the president that makes the United
+
+States a better place to be living in. For the past century there has been war and terroist in the U.S, and the cause to all the violence is because when Senators are suppose to represent our state they say what in their favor. IF we focus on what the people want we will have a better chance of stopping all the battle. People that are serving the armed forces can come home to their children and family, the local news will not talk abou the next war and the disagreement that this country has aganist another. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89a2d0db6426,44079A5EEDDE,If we begin to use popluar vote we can begin to have more and more people voting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e8b58ecb910,44079A5EEDDE,"Many citzens do not vote because they think that their votes do not count or aren't counted. With popular vote they can be sure that they will be counted and that the votes are for the people not for the Senator. As we get older, this country will not ben the same as before or how it was in the 1800's, we are goinmg to start changing the things that we think are best for this country, we do not want to start the same wars we did centuries ago. Improving it would mean to take risk and if we have to change Electoral College to popular vote, then so be it and let's change it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1926b6a8fb00,44079A5EEDDE,"I suggest for now on instead of using Electoral College we start using popular votings. If there is ever a case where the votes come out teied then we instead on using Electoral College, this would of be if there were to ever be a tired in the voting session. If this country is all in choices of the people and for the people why can we start to use popular vote instead.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f25186d83893,4409FED98F5A,I think that students ought to have there vote in the situation because why would you make people do something they don't want to do. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2900c749e93c,4409FED98F5A,I also think that they should help in some way because the more people that help the more productive and fun it will be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06897541b5ee,4409FED98F5A,You can also split the people that are helping into different groups to cover places more in the region. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c07bb0c0ddcc,4409FED98F5A,The more we help at a young age the more we will do it through out our lives. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3acf6a26ae39,4409FED98F5A,Helping the community is the most important thing next to a education and we should all want to be a part of it no matter how young or old you are. The more that we can help our community the stronger it may become because people will invite friends to help. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+344b4f06b7b2,4409FED98F5A,So i think that you should make them do it but to make it more fun to make them want to come and invite friends to help. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e4cee4523c21,441097905601,I would like to tell you about how I think about doing community service. The reason I wanted to tell you about this is because I understand that some students would like to do community service and not others. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3aa48fa39bc3,441097905601,In my opinion I think there should be a reason why some of the students want to do community service and not others. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fd78a0551752,441097905601,If the students that want to do community service can do that. If there is only a small group of people than it would not be a good way to have the work done ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a77fc209b36,441097905601,My other reason is not everyone would like to pick up liter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c0a006ad199,441097905601,It might not be what students want to do during there free time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e57bb5bbfa63,441097905601,I all so understand that it is very important to do community service around the school and you can learn many things from doing community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ee0be3dcd842,441097905601,I also like to tell you that there should be a list of places that there going to do service at. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e82482e236a,44128AB790AD,I am in favor of changing to election by a popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5ba8027d403,44128AB790AD,I believe that the people should have more of a say in who runs our nation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f568f601ae0d,44128AB790AD,"I also believe that we might be a better nation if we were the ones who decided who ran it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d9663c2d8be,44128AB790AD,"538 electors speak for the billions in the United States of America. Also, if the electors vote and the results come out to be a tie, the election now has to be put into the hands of the House of Representatives. Being as there is only one vote from each state allowed the results will probably not reflect the choices and wishes of the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+082881cc17f9,44128AB790AD,"The Electoral College is an old compromise the was made by the founding fathers, but some changes have to be made to fit the modern times and ways ",Claim,Effective,,,
+158e225b8251,44128AB790AD,With the way society is built now changes to some of the political aspects of the country have to be made. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14be15c6ab66,44128AB790AD,"Although the Electoral College has its pros, such as its setup for if a tie is made ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a9136d76b164,44128AB790AD,there are more cons in the situation ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+3dc22c006977,44128AB790AD,"So with that I am asking that you think about the people and try to change some of the ways of the United States political system. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4dd5c01a71a6,441A5D13BCF3,"I would like to bring to your attention the matter of the electoral college, and the unjust way that presidents are elected in our  country. While there are benefits, more of the negative effects come to play when reviewing and contemplating on whether this system is effect or not ",Lead,Effective,,,
+dc2fdbc6476c,441A5D13BCF3,"The Electoral College is very unfair, and should be subject for abolishment ",Position,Effective,,,
+b861bddabc8d,441A5D13BCF3,"The number of electors in the Electoral College consits of 538 electors in total, which makes a tie completley possible, although it has never happened, in the past only a few more votes were required to create this unlikley problem ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e69523d7ef61,441A5D13BCF3,"According to source 3, paragraph 18, Richard A. Posner claims that, ""A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538- is an even number, but it is highly unlikley..."" There's a shockingly short ammount of votes required to turn an election into a situtation where both canidates have an even number of votes, a problem almost occured in 1976, that were if, according to source #2, paragraph #12, Bradford Plumer, ""a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way."" Those may look as if they are big numbers, however in comparison to the amount of voters in each state, these are not large amounts of people who needed to vote the other way. In comparison, the number of representatives is determined by the number of members in your congressional delegation, the amount of electors per state is fair. Still, however, the event of a tie would cause a lot of issues within our country, and would be relieved if the winner was elected by popular vote. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+07ec88ee0b67,441A5D13BCF3,"In addition, electors are United States citizens, and are entitled to their own vote based on the Constitution, while they are allotted their own vote, this gives opportunity for problems to arrise ",Claim,Effective,,,
+44e7277735c5,441A5D13BCF3,"Politics are very lowkey orders of buisness, and in 1960, the legislatures in Louisiana almost used the disaster factor to swing the election in their favor, by electing people who were more likley to vote for the opposer of John F. Kennedy, because they prefered the other canidate. According to source #3, paragraph 16, Posner addresses, ""..each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nomie (and that trust is rarely betrayed"". . . [; however,] it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote."" Since the electors can technically vote for whoever they desire, it can cause an unfair advantage to the electors sent who vote for the other candiate ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5ae98c2eb132,441A5D13BCF3,"The other factor tying in is that the voters feel as if their direct vote does not count. While it is true one vote cannot sway the election, it becomes apparent that canidates must have transregional appeal, meaning that they're favored in that region of the U.S. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ba55f0b7da6f,441A5D13BCF3,"The canidates hold off on campaigning in states they already know they have dominated the votes in, because there is no one region that can elect a president. This makes voter feel inferior, and discourage them from ""wasting"" their time voting. If we use the majority of votes way to establish the new president, it is more likely that they will decide to vote once again, since they feel as if their opinion once again matters ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8266ed5867ee,441A5D13BCF3,"As you may recall, the 2000 election had a dispute between the popular vote ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96003d664a97,441A5D13BCF3,"Confusion with the votes in a state that decides which kind of electors to send to vote creates issues, because it is unclear which the majority goes to, a canidate may recieve more votes than the others. This creates an advantage to a candiate, and makes a problem for the people who voted for the other canidate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0bd058a829cb,441A5D13BCF3,"Also, in source 3, paragraph 22, Posner expresses the issues when a run-off election occurs ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ef726883402,441A5D13BCF3,"Some canidates will not win a majority of casted votes, the pressure complicates the presidential election, leaving the true, clear descion to the Electoral College ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+35796b1c8a79,441A5D13BCF3,"In conclusion, the Electoral College seems unconstitutional, since a variety of issues can occur due to the many problems that could potentially occur. The United States should shift into a more reasonable and logical means of electing our president in our Republic, where everybody is equal. The Electoral College should no longer decide the president based on the possibility of a tie, the possibility for betrayal of trust and disputes due to how close the votes are. The system should change to where the popular opinion should  decide on the president of the United States of America, making people believe that their vote will be fairly counted. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+92d475a75948,444DC9706435,"Well first if i go back to paragraph 3 Nasa states that they thought from sending the pictures to the pubic it be a good way to atract public attention to fund mar's missions.
+
+""The face"" became very popular when Nasa first sent it to the public. Also on paragraph 7 the author states that when the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia ,they found out that ""the face"" was just a regular natural landform. In the year of 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor was able to snap a picture of the landform, as said by Garvin
+
+""the picture actually showed the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa- landforms common around the American West"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0986480cc57,444DC9706435,I don't think the landform is an ancient artifact or any alian artifact i just think its a normal landform that happens to look like a human or alian face. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+09ea4685d73f,444DC9706435,Even if Nasa was lying to us the landform benefits Nasa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a168f424758,444DC9706435,When they first snapped the photograph and shared it with the public it received alot of public attention. Many people funded the missions to snap more photographs of the landform to get a better look at it. It was basically was a waste of time and money because it ended up being just a regular landform and not an alian artifact as the world believed it was at the time.   ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5982eb7b25de,4453444AF383,There has been a strong arguement going on weather we should keep the Electoral College or if we should change it. Both sides have made a strong claim and a strong arguement. I got the opportunity to read two articles that are against and in favor of it. After reading these articles I have made decision. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+8b11df5affef,4453444AF383,I have came to the conclusion that we should keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0704638d2fc3,4453444AF383,"My first reason why, we should keep Electoral College is because this country was founded on it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+52f0cc320ef9,4453444AF383,"Also, our 4 founding fathers were in favor of this Electoral College. This is a principle in which this great country has been founded on. This is the history of this country and the principles on which it was founded on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+348e75951c34,4453444AF383,"Another reason why, we should keep Electoral College is that this would avoid the run off of elections ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d09c4057bd8,4453444AF383,"If there was no Electoral College candidates will be fighting for the popular vote. The problem with this popular vote is that there would be no candidate that recieves a majority of the votes. In an Electoral College there would not be this problem, since in each state the winner takes it all. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3adf227713a5,4453444AF383,"Last but not least, we should keep Electoral College because this allows for each candidate to pick his or her own groups of electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa228b6bcc1e,4453444AF383,"This allows the running candidate to pick out the group that he or she would be able to work with the best, and get along with the most. This would also allow the candidate to better fight or argue on certain matters and on certain cases. Also, it is important for a candidate to get along with his or her group that they will be working with. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+553b4ddf8ed9,4453444AF383,These are all of the reasons why I think and belive that we should keep Electoral College.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+310dae66b435,446CB94BD577,The electoral college is an institution that has always guided  the presidential elections. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+d398a6cf59f1,446CB94BD577,The electoral college is tradition and shouldn't be changed ,Position,Effective,,,
+dfee63ba19f4,446CB94BD577,"it has balanced relegation of power within the states, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b2ba3ec5bfdb,446CB94BD577,"almost always a definate winner, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ebf8dfe8c25b,446CB94BD577,it is able to hold a set timeline for the elections. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e3653c2a1f36,446CB94BD577,"The college has always been able to choose a president that is able to lead our country well, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7d07e2df9343,446CB94BD577,"electoral college is a representation of the people of the United States of America. As the president's constituents, we have the power to choose our leader, and they make it a little easier for us. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+909ab0634195,446CB94BD577,"This is why Wyoming has only three votes and Florida has twenty nine. It's nothing to complain about, because it's the same number of people each state has in both the Senate and the House of Representatives, meaning each state has at least three votes, decided by its population. This is not a very bad system because the states with huge populations have a bit of their power curbed by the number of electors. So if Wyoming increases its population, and Florida has its population decreased, one of the electors could be removed from Florida and added to Wyoming, balancing the scale of power between them. It's only fair for a populous state like Florida to have more electors anyway, there are many opinions that are yearning to be heard within the ginormous population, and there must be enough electors who can take it upon themselves to voice them. The Electoral College protects us from the probability of voting just because the candidate is from the same state. A majority of people will vote because of a close association with a candidate if the electoral college is abolished. This is why the electoral college only contains 538 people, because nobody wants millions of voters in California voting for the same candidate just because they are the Governor of California. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eedf21e3fba5,446CB94BD577,"Due to the even amount of votes in the electoral college, there is a slight chance of a tie. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3238ca6c86ee,446CB94BD577,"However, with all but two states being part of the ""winner-take-all"" system, ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8710ba2bd560,446CB94BD577,"This is why swing states are so important to the canditates, they know that the chances of them winning the votes in the other party's states are almost impossible, so they must gather all of the votes they can from the states that are known for their swing-like tendencies. It also goes the other way, each candidate trusts that their own party's states will vote for them, so there is no need to waste the money and campaign. Unless its the primary elections, candidates don't typically campaign where they know that the votes are all but set in stone. It's like going grocery shopping, if you know that you are allergic to peanut butter and you already have all the jam you need, you will only go for the special bread that everybody fights for right? The candidates are the same, they don't go after what they already have and what they can't have, only what they might earn, or else it's just a waste of money, so nobody should be able to complain about a candidates campaigning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4850275a8f7b,446CB94BD577,"The election process is guided by this timeline, for example, voting starts on the second Thursday of the month of November every single time. The Electoral College is a huge part of this process also, and to destroy that would be heartbreaking for the nuerotics that can't stand any change in routine. If the Electoral College were to be abolished, and popular vote was to be instigated throughout the country, any semblance of a schedule would be torn away. Problems would spring up all over the place, and everything would all go to hell. Instead of recounts for counties, whole states would need recounts. If a populous state like Texas were to need a recount, never mind a week, a month wouldn't be enough time to recount it all perfectly. The government would be stuck without a leader, and worst case scenario, the United States of America could be put in a state of anarchy by the end of the decade. Then, we wouldn't be United anymore. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+340407499646,446CB94BD577,"The Electoral College has been there from the beginning, and the without it the United States of America could be thrown into chaos. Traditions shouldn't be broken and the Electoral College represents the biggest one of them all, it balances power between each of the states, defines a true winner, and guides the U.S. on a set timeline. It wouldn't be a far stretch to say that the Electoral College helps keep the order of the country. Truthfully, everyone needs some semblance of order, and the Electoral College provides that and more.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+469ede79cb27,4475026EACB1,I belive that we should change the election to a popular vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6d21ffbfd630,4475026EACB1,we should make the choice ourselfs so it matters more in the long run ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9db5ed47380,4475026EACB1,it will make more potental voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7047ec8f4f3f,4475026EACB1,We as americans should have more power when it comes to chooseing our president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19899827d876,4475026EACB1,Some people may argue that the electorial college avoids the problem of run-off elections as stated in source two ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f9935d1bee43,4475026EACB1,if there is a tie then there should have the previouse presedent of the united states vote to brek the tie. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+42c3dbdd5715,4475026EACB1,I dont believe any vote should count more than a citizens vote. If we are suppose to have a goverment run by the people why cant the peoples vote matter. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+22b514a0ff88,4475026EACB1,people would vote more if their vote could be that single vote that decides who`s president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d95fb42173e,4475026EACB1,In the electorial college only their vote matters the popular vote doesn`t make a difference in the long run. The reason people vote is so that the person they want as president will win the race not so the person the electorial college wants to will win. The popular vote is simply deciding electors who can vote however they please which means the citizens vote doesnt make a difference wich unfair. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bee410fede66,4475026EACB1,In conclusion america should have a popular vote not an electorial college because the peoples vote should matter. If you want a fair and honest goverment everyones vote should matter equaly and there should be no electorial college. If you care about what the american citizens opinions and what they have to say get rid of the electorial college. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f54814e5b814,4478B3244F49,I think we should keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e570dfb156e2,4478B3244F49,"it at least gives people a say on weather or not the person they vote for gets elected or not, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdf0e55be330,4478B3244F49,"people always say that you can't complain if you don't vote, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+13483da29bb7,4478B3244F49,"America was made to give people freedom, so people being able to pick the pesident is a big part of our freedom, and taking that away leaves us with not as much say in big desions such as a presidental election. The people that would probably complain the most is older people because they are use to being able to vote, and taking that away would get them angry I'm sure, and the people complain louder than they do praise. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f9daab7172cd,4478B3244F49,Another reason why they shouldn't take away electoral colleges is because of the amount of complant they would get from everyone if they do decide to take electoral college away. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+785c548746e7,4478B3244F49,"It might even make some people turn against their country, but that only goes for the people who are really into politics and voting and things of that nature. People say you can't complain if you don't vote, but if they take that perivlage away, I'm sure you'll be hearing even more complaining than if people have the right to vote, but even so, this up and coming generation isn't really into voting anyways, but it should be avalable regardless. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65027f47eb7b,4478B3244F49,"Those are basically the two big reasons why voting should be avalable to everyone, and not just left up to sentators and stuff. People want a say on who's running their country and because there will be tons of complaining if voting is taken away from them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+388a62b54670,44DBB635DEB1,"We have all hear about this ""Face"" right ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+df82d815434d,44DBB635DEB1,Well if you haven't Is really just a landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b9a0ae6d646a,44DBB635DEB1,The other Scientists has all of these people rallied up because they think that aliens are to exist. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20b6d71caca8,44DBB635DEB1,"That cannot be possible because , if aliens existed then why are we just finding them? Wouldn't we already have proof of their existence ? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8df48ca022dc,44DBB635DEB1,"Then Again , there are all types of landforms on earth some man made and more of the natural kind , So basically what you guys are saying is that if we find landform that looks like something is automatically aliens ??? what about mount rushmore ? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea2e9474f81c,44DBB635DEB1,"That is a man made structure not saying that the ""face"" is man made but its just not relevant to get all of this contrversy about something that we barely know about . 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ff816a47aaa,44DBB635DEB1,"So Therefore, You guys really dont know what the structure is. none of us know what ""it"" really is ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8492477b9974,44DBB635DEB1,", It might look like a face but aliens are just not relevant enough to believe that they actually did something of this nature ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+45ef68651eae,44DBB635DEB1,"i personally do Not believe in aliens , well would you blame me ? We have been to the moon, we have had a rover on mars for years ! and what do we get? nothing , just a rocky surface . no aliens , no water , No life period. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0bda5ecd2741,44DBB635DEB1,"Nevertheless, even though in paragraph 10 it says, ""that that put out The maximum camera resoulution and each pixel spans 1.56 meters thats still not giving us any proof . We have been on this ""Aliens Are Real"" Stuff for a while now , and we dont have nothing that proves it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce20b4356b4f,44DBB635DEB1,"Don't you guys think that we should just cut it all out the picture ? we are wasting money on absoutely NOTHING. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b0496f2c28ed,44DBB635DEB1,"Finally , as I finish my statement I will just say that im'm not telling you guys to give up on your research , Not at all . but all I am saying is That If your gonna try and find these ""aliens"" of yours Atleast have some proof of their existance. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b8106427d4b0,44DEA88FDD83,I think that we should ude the popular vote for the president of the United State ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea73fa8d9497,44DEA88FDD83,It will give the poeple of the United States the chance to say who they want in the congree and say who we wnt to be our presedent ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7b783ea0441,44DEA88FDD83,The Electoral College is not a democratic way of handleing it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6901f58b273,44DEA88FDD83,"But on the down side it can make things very unorganized, having us worry about every little person we have to put into congress. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6e331dc0fcdf,44DEA88FDD83,"In the United States we are a eaqual and fair contry, but with the Electoral College it does not us, the people of our fine nation the one to elect our presadent. It does not give us the freedom of making our own choices n who want to run our contry ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8da68cdabfc2,44DEA88FDD83,"if we use the popular vote for the presadent of the united states it lets us, the people choose ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b7f20db2377,44DEA88FDD83,It lets us the poeple the right to use our own opion and our own thought on who should run this country. Every person in this cutry has a voivce they do and they should be able to speak with thier voice. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e8f14fec28d,44DEA88FDD83,If we use the Electoral Colledege it is not democratic ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b0eb07d4108,44DEA88FDD83,"It does not let us the people choose. The Electoral Colledge baseecely sees that the citizens of our contrys opions do not matter. They are saying that the Electoral Colledges votes matter the most those are the only once we are worrying about. But thats not true our opion does matter, we are what make up this amazing cuntry not just the Electoral Colledge. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f5d0b88c638,44DEA88FDD83,But you see there is up side to using the Electoral Colledge. It can keep us organized and what i mean by that is it will help the pople know who exactly all comes with the vote of the presedent. It also makes it alot esier to just vote for one group instead of voting for all 34 people. It will keep the people from accsadentaly voting for the wrong group. It will help the poeple make there desion on what they think best and not hat they have been told is the best choice. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+df96ceabbb5c,44DEA88FDD83,"The popoular vote for presadent is the best way to go. It gives the pople a voice and the Ellectoral Colledge isnt democratic. But the Electoral Colledge keep us, the people organized and helps us make the right decition. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9f15318fb33a,44E1D37DCE9B,"What is the electoral college? is when the people voten for meeting the President and Vice President of the college, is a process, not a place and is a election of the president by a popular vote of qualified. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+22f55d38507a,44E1D37DCE9B,The opinion of people is that is a good form of meeting a President and Vice President the reason for is good an electoral college is because having of discussion the work and  your can see from who vote. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+235a7aad4adb,44E1D37DCE9B,"One of the reason of What is the electral college? is that having of discussion the work. Acording to the lecture ""
+
+Does the Electoral College Work?
+
+(source1:What is the electoral college?)
+
+"" say that  "" For this reason, in the following dicussion, the word ""state"" also refers to the district of Columbia."". Is that take one refers the District of Columbia that no is a bag idea tha is a good idea. The conclusion is that is good that saying the discussion of the work and that your can see from who vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+915e741c841e,44E1D37DCE9B,"One of the reason of What is the electral college? is that your can see from who vote. Acording to the lecture ""
+
+Does the Electoral College Work?
+
+(source1:What is the electoral college?)
+
+"" say that ""The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A masjority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators...."" . No to all people that like this because no feel preparate for this so for this no vote. And the concluding for this reason is that no is only good knowing the discussion of the work that is good your can see from who vot and feel preparate for take a decission. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d19903f37e65,44E1D37DCE9B,"More people say that no have a problem if have or no have a President or Vice president,this is no good because a President take decission importants and the Vice President help to President to take this decission. For this have take good decission in the moment of the vote. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+803659ee68c7,44E1D37DCE9B,The conclution of this is that know of discussion of work and know for you one vote and this acording whint this.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0dd5496f809a,44F6DC9C8326,"Our school is a very complex school, with different varieties of personalities. Some people may find it relaxing to help others while some may not have the time to do so. Community service such as picking up litter on a busy high way or walking dogs for people who don't have the ability to do so would, in my opinion, builds character. Community service will help many others while making the students stop and realize that when you help people they may be helped in return. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e7ec44e1d771,44F6DC9C8326,I think it would be a good idea to offer community service but I do not think it should be mandatory. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f0a2511795d3,44F6DC9C8326,Helping others is very important and will not only help the person the services are being provided for but also the helper. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b85225baaf1a,44F6DC9C8326,"All and all school is a place for education some may debate , but along with education you need responsibility which some students lack. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7968b039040a,44F6DC9C8326,Maybe offer certain community services as extra credit. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8d5379ffed02,44F6DC9C8326,"hold a meeting 1 day a week during study hall/ advisory, or after school for dedicated students to brainstorm various ways to help the community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7db52e564f37,44F6DC9C8326,As the principle and the final say in all school aspects I think it would be very rewarding to every one if we started community service as a school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4c42e6fed9a9,44F6DC9C8326,It would also give the school a better name and more and more people would want to volunteer and help the school out. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+35884183353a,44F6DC9C8326,We could hold monthly annual field trips to various highways or if that may cause unnecessary commotion even a retiring home and visit with the elders. Any little thing could help. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+76ddf6b42b81,44F6DC9C8326,All students should want to help others but the reality is not all care as much as others. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0ca239b24aaf,44F6DC9C8326,I think its important to instill the proper traits in school but its not just up to us. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d5537958c941,44F6DC9C8326,I propose that twice a week we go from class room and recycle old and unused paper. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7236ea65d845,44F6DC9C8326,"As for mandatory community services I don't think it should be, but I do think it would be very appreciated to many to offer community services to the population. Parents might even want to get involved and before you know it others will want to start. If you start with something minor and work your way up others will want to participation when they thinks its easy. My proposal to you is that we offer many different variates along with different time fames to offer our time and support of those who are willing and ready to perform acts of pure good deeds to further better our community. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e997e9626d60,451D81265E8E,The Electoral College has been established since the founding of our country. It is a system that has been tried and tested to work over the course of centuries. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+8f8da01c92a2,451D81265E8E,"It should be upheld for it's ability to produce a solid outcome, and though it has the possibility of failing it's faults are not worse than the popular vote system ",Position,Effective,,,
+0b978275a4e1,451D81265E8E,and that the Electoral College fosters a presidency campaign that appeals to multiple regions of the United States. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f68180997051,451D81265E8E,"This fair system allows representation of the people's will, just like the rest of our government does. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+4dca7a1cb466,451D81265E8E,"Faith in a certain outcome of the presidential election ensures that the vote has as little complications as possible, and is a reason the Electoral College is necessary ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b02a7dfd95b4,451D81265E8E,"According to source one, ""What Is The Electoral College?"", each political party has it's own set of electors that equal the amount of congressional delegates per state. Usually each state has a ""winner-take-all"" method, so the presidential candidate that gets majority in your state will get all of the electors that represent their party, not just most of them. This is beneficicial to the outcome of the election becuase it makes the ability for a candiate to get majority vote much simpler. There is less of a possibility of a tie, or an outcome where no candidate wins. Source 3, ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep out despised method of choosing president"", states that ""even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state..."" , therefore allowing the candidate to secure all votes to their side, instead of having the votes divided on the line of majority rule, and causing rifts between Electoral College voters. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2d4c44d34042,451D81265E8E,"No system is perfect, and the Electoral College is not exempt from this. ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"", Source 2, argues that a term called 'disaster factor', or the possibility of immenent disaster due to the Electoral College system, is why the Electoral College system should be abolished ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4dab9ec4ce4f,451D81265E8E,"The passage uses individual instances, like the fact that in 1960, segrigationists in Lousiana nearly appointed Democratic electors that would vote against their candidate, or that in rare instances, ""faithless"" electoral voters would vote for the other side. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3b5a0a0584cb,451D81265E8E,"These are strawman arguments, using specific instances to come to a conclusion that the whole system should be abolished. While the Electoral College system isn't perfect, neither is the popular vote system ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+dd0b0d59de25,451D81265E8E,"The popular vote system has a higher chance of causing a tie between candidates, and it doesn't have a ""winner-take-all"" standard. In a tie, the vote would be given to the House of Representatives, which, according to source 2, ""..can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people.."", as citizens often vote one party in for president and another for Congress. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf2823871d63,451D81265E8E,"In addition, the Electoral College fosters a more nationwide appeal for the candidate's campaign ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cf6f900dca3d,451D81265E8E,"Source 3 brings up the fact that no region in the United States has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The ""winner-take-all"" system further benefits this, because in order to win, candidates have to focus their attention on states where their majority vote is insecure. They will not focus on regions where they have essentially secured the majority rule and therefore secured all the electoral votes. In popular vote, they would have to focus extensively on those regions, as the few that are not in the majority would need convincing. Source 3 goes into detail as to why a regionally picked candidate is not a proper show of the will of the people. It states that ""The residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised - to feel that thier votes do not count, that their new preident will have no regard for their interests..."", and so having a trans-regional appeal is essential to properly representing the will of United States citizens ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+91edf5a76094,451D81265E8E,"Our Electoral College system should be defended and kept. It has the ability to produce a solid outcome, has flaws but ones that are not more disasterous than other systems, and drives candidates to try and present a national appeal. A single vote does not decide an election, the representation of our people should not be split in half, divided. The Electoral College does its best to give the nation the president it deserves. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9f2ab18660dc,451E43CF8A30,I think that they should keep the electoral collage because the founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3cdcb11376a9,451E43CF8A30,"The Electoral Collage process consists of the selection of the electors. Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors. Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors.
+
+Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards the electors to the winning presidential candidate. After the persidential election, your governor prepares a ""
+
+Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. Your state certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as a part of the official records of the presidential election.
+
+The Electorial Collage restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. They avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the casts.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d5c509d8237,451E8369BB76,Yes i think the students are benefit ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d801754f39cc,451E8369BB76,they don't need come to schol just what they have to use is a cumputer. and i think is more better because you can do more thinks in you home you can help you family. and you have time to work and you can study in the same time. and they can make money because after you done with the high schhol if you want to continue in the university. and you have money you can continue. and if you come to school you have time to work. and if you study from you home you have time to study and so more think. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+551d0a715026,451E8369BB76,a lot of people don't came to school because they need money to buy food and pay his rent because they don't take help from his family. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43121ae5aba5,451E8369BB76,For my example i came to school because my family help me but a lot of people from others country came to this country and they don't have family here so they wanna study but they wanna help his family and his county and if a lot of school have the program what you can take class from you home i think is more better because you can do a lot of thinks for example i know a lot of people they wanna study but they need to work so they say they can't study and work in the same time so they have to take one of two option so they have to pick one and they say they wanna work because if they go to school they can't make money and if they work they can buy his food and they can pay the rent for example i have one cousin he was in school and he need just one year to graduate but when he was in schhol his mom said he need to work because she don't wanna pay his rent anymore and he leave the school and he dedicated just to work because he need pay his ren ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c65a46740ff,451E8369BB76,if school have the program he can work and he can study too ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c0674985d02,451E8369BB76,that one is to sad because he ned just one more year to graduated and he don't graduated because he need pay his rent tha's want i think is a lot of school have the program they help a lot of guys ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c91dfff98f40,451E8369BB76,Here is one more example a lot of people live in mountains and the bus don't go so they don't have transportaion so they don't come to school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa6e1b5672b7,451E8369BB76,maybe they wanna study and they can't come. i know people in west virginia. they don. t go school because the school is like 1 hours and they don't have transportation. and if all the school in united state have the program they can help a lot of familys and they cxan open a lot of doors for the people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ec61f0ebabb,451E8369BB76,"Here is another example i have one friend. He come to school just one or two days per week. Because he need to work. Because he said he have to work because he don't have money for buy food and pay rent in the same time that is sad because he said i want to graduated but i can't because i havde to work for pay my rent and buy my thinks. and if schools have the program they can help him to do his gol.
+
+I meet one friend in walmart last week i play for soccer team in Generic_City . and i was with my short that say barsity in the from of the short. and the guy said hey in think i know you and i said where you saw me. and he said in Generic_City and. He ask me if i'm in Generic_City now and i said yes and you and said i'm not in school anymore. and i said why and he said because inmigration took my parents and they send to my country and i'm alone in this country so i need to work for pay a lot of think. and he said i wanna study but i can't because i can't do two thinks in the same time. and said my gol is work with police and i said hey wanna you don't study in the day and work in the night and he said i can't because i have to help my parents in honduras because id i don't send money to then they can buy foo ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6e1e9f42337,451E8369BB76,my mom maybe love if i take class onlines because she work all day ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee1a108cbfc8,451E8369BB76,if i take class online and can help her to do thinks in my home because she go to work in the morning at 7 am and she came back at 5 pm and the end she go to the part time and she come back at 11:45 pm and if i take class online i can wok too and i can help her with think in the home and money to pay a rent she is to old. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aba7ab6f61f7,451E8369BB76,"There are some kids that don't go to school, having the schhol next to thenm, but there is alot of people out here that are thing to go to school or at less take onlne classes but they can't because they have to wotk some of the people even have two jobs. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a9677a62ed36,4548C04F9AC7,I think they can attend to do it at home to finish their assignment ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d28314b0603a,4548C04F9AC7,"You can search the website up so that you can finished it the assignment to handle it in to your teacher if you missing anything from your others class you can finished with your others class you have with your schdule. If you stuck on the question go asked your teacher to helped you out now go to any comptuer that you wanted to be in you have to sign in thorugh your computer to logn in now you hace to wait unitl the screen show up and now go to the website that is on your paper to finished on your assignment on your homework.
+
+First now go to any comptuer that you wanted to be in you have to sign in thorugh your computer to logn in now you hace to wait unitl the screen is done. Now listen to your teachers to follow the dirction how to go in the website. If you didn't finished the assignment that you can finished it at home. When you take your worksheet home you have to bring it back if you didn't finished it your assignment it be came homework. Now the teacher said now sign off the computer the bell will ring in about 5 minutes left to go your next class.
+
+I went to my next class and I have next is Comp Skills so I asked the teacher can you able to help me to finished my other class? the teacher say yes, I would like to help you out to finish any homework that you are missing other class. But, first do it in your own first if you stuck with a question you can go asked your teacher to helped you out faster way. Now you can turn the assignment in to your teacher to put the grade in for you to boost your grade up then your parents like it to have A or B in the others class. Now it's lunchtime we have a break what working on we will coming back to finsihed it up see if you have anything you missing to your other class started working on it.
+
+I think you can making your own music video it's really difficult to put in all the shot you have if you have all the shot now you can edit the video by yourself. You can looked up search how you edit your video to upload it on your Youtube Channel so you saw it the video if you still stuck you can watched again again over again in till you know how to edit it your video. If you seen the video when
+
+I edit the music video if you see it perfect you can upload your Youtube Channel so it will be a lot of people want to see music video I have been doing since my career. You can go asked your friend to see your music video you have done in your future since when you were a little kid you want to be singing career but, it's hard to lived far away your parents but it's ok you can text them you are okay or you can facetime with them and see how well you being doing without your parents with you.
+
+Your friends text you that it's was amazing song you have been writing on well thank you you guys for cheering me since I make these song was in my heart. I text them that one day we should hang out sometimes that getting to know each other more or playing some games together or going to your friends house to do something for ours Youtube Channel for us to making some more money to making all these video it was my career to doing this I was 15 years old
+
+I know how to making a video to see how much money I making this video I would proud to myself that I will making more money to raising my parents just like they raising me when I was a little kid now I have to raising them back. If I asked one of my firends that can we making video together so that we can make it as a teammate for making money to raising ours parents we can making a video anything you want in your past of years you been doing right now. From Elementary school I join chorus I really do liking it so the next year I join chorus again but I really want to do something different it's means to me that I really want to have a solo but it's came true I have solo it's the lion king song. On Sunday, when I'm in still teenager after Chinese New Year coming up very soon at my temple so I sign up for singing a song for Tet so I have a wonderful time on Sunday I was singing and dancing it's was really tired while singing and dancing at the same time. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f2e951ef251,4548C04F9AC7,I think agreed to this prompt because you can attend the website at home also that you can see your classmate on the list that you do well on the test or didn't do well on the test too. You always have to sign in your computer to the website that you have to working on with your assignment. Making videos when you were a little kid making more money out of it making videos with your friends or you can do traveling making video or making music video. Sometimes I like to performance on my temple or at school or you can practice at home dancing or singing. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c2da1aacd82d,4575B9D207C5,Well people should pick up litter and i am going to tell you why: ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2d3f469cb938,4575B9D207C5,First when your community looks bad other people don't want to live in a bad looking community. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+77628817f168,4575B9D207C5,"All students should take some part in preventing littering, but the principal should make a list of which group of people who should do it every week and not all students can take part in community service because of the fact that some students have some form of after school activities and sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67a843731efc,4575B9D207C5,"Only those that agree to work in community service should do it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ad5d9e73981,4575B9D207C5,"If u do this every week we could get this community looking good in no time. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38d5f6455b19,4575B9D207C5,There should not be any elementary kids picking up litter on the side of the road ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16ac6a82cdf4,4575B9D207C5,only kids 13 and up should be picking up litter on the side of the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e6c16392958,4575B9D207C5,"If some one gets hit by a car the parents could sue the school for making there child pick up litter.
+
+That is the downfall of the subject because if a child gets hit the school would be responsible for what happens to the kid and the principal would have to tell the parents why their kid is dead. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16fe7d4aa42d,45775C79FA64,"Over the years, the use of technology in schools has become more and more normalized, Sites, such as Blackboard and Google Classroom are used throughout the school year by teachers, students, as well as parents. There are many people that are skeptical about these changes, but especially the idea of schooling through online programs. Some feel as through it isn't in the best interest of students, and shouldn't replace a traditional education ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f6e1b1573f35,45775C79FA64,"Although some disagree, students would benefit from attending classes at home ",Position,Adequate,,,
+74ef8f8de4a2,45775C79FA64,it'll improve mental health ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f58884938de,45775C79FA64,allow more flexibility. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3551b5fbffb6,45775C79FA64,Students would benefit from enrolling in courses at home because it'll simply be easier for some. Mental illness can be very debilitating and can significantly affect a student's performance in school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5970a4a05b8f,45775C79FA64,"A lot of the time, this is overlooked, or simply ignored, as it is often stigmatized. Conditions such as anxiety and depression are common examples, and stress will simply exacerbate one's symptoms. Such things would make attending school extremely difficult for some students. Being able to do coursework at home would likely alleviate the problems they were having before, allow for improvement, and later success. Other things that people don't always think about, or may even look down upon, is treatment and recovery. Relapse, tragedy, etc would be common examples as well. Being able to do courses online might be the best option for someone that wants to take time off to get better, and return to school once they're ready. In conclusion, people face situations that others might not even think about, and so they shouldn't be stripped of an option that would ultimately be best for them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d67f002c5785,45775C79FA64,Students would benefit from enrolling in courses at home because it allows for more options ,Claim,Effective,,,
+143aff21d098,45775C79FA64,"Some may do better by planning out their day based on what works for them. For example, school is typically an 8 hour day, from 9am-3pm, 5 days a week. This is probably fine for most, but others simply can't operate like that. For example, some people might feel more attentive in the evening, and therefore can be more productive then. Some might have a hard time focusing for long amounts of time, and do better with breaks throughout the day. The list goes on. Traditional education is usually very restrictive and doesn't accommodate for people that don't do well with said issues. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+03b50c203d3c,45775C79FA64,"Another reason this would be a better option for students, is so that one would be able to plan out their day and fulfill responsibilities. This might be work, taking care of siblings, or parents, and so on. But, it might also include other activities, like sports, music, travel, etc. Online schooling would be convenient for those with different lifestyles. In conclusion, all of these things would be made possible while allowing a student to receive adequate education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dfeadef073d2,45775C79FA64,"Many people make the argument that doing courses from home isn't an appropriate way of learning, and should be done in the classroom ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eb90c2e41152,45775C79FA64,"Reasons will include things like, ""it's an excuse for students to continue bad habits and remain irresponsible"", ""it was good enough for us back then"", or ""they should be able to do it like everyone else"", etc. Some may hold such opinions because it's simply an unconventional way of learning, or allows students the freedom to do things their own way ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aed06142c5f9,45775C79FA64,But it stems from the belief that a student's reasoning behind it are unacceptable ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9f32d7fcfbe9,45775C79FA64,There's also an assumption that homeschooling is a new concept ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a26da7b10f15,45775C79FA64,when it's not ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f313ee50035c,45775C79FA64,"The only thing that's changed is one's ability to access resources from home, through their computer. Adults essentially do the exact same thing when they do their own work from home. This is known as teleworking . For example, my mom, an economist, gets to do this several times a week because it gives her a flexible schedule. Certain occupations, such as computer asssistance allow for this too. If reasons that include mental health, or individual preferences applies to both adults and students, why should there be a double standard? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cce8046928f8,45775C79FA64,"In conclusion, the most important thing is that all of us have an opportunity for success, and whether one gets there online or on-site shouldn't matter. Everyone's situations aren't the same, and so each individual one should always be considered, not compared to others. Advancement of technology has helped many people all over the world, regarding education. The ability to receive an adequate one is essential for one's success and benefits the many people who don't have access to it. This not only includes K-12, but post-secondary education as well, as online degrees and certifcations are continously being introduced. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9b50b6a6f197,4595126165A7,"After reading the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" i have came to the conclusion that i am against these vehicals. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b2c582d2072b,4595126165A7,They're not the safest vehicles ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1f5a8cdaba92,4595126165A7,"could be really exspensive, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b0344ebdd018,4595126165A7,can cause issues with the law. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f54b6d7eb9fe,4595126165A7,Vehicals that dive on there own can be very dangerous. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0edb04f6bb31,4595126165A7,"Think about all the programming and manufacturing that would be in these cars, what if something goes wrong on the interstate? I know that the article says , ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills"" what if the driver cannot regain control of the vehicale when they need too? Major accidents can happen and can cause fatal injuries or death. There's already many wrong things that happen on the roads everyday , with people in control of their lives. So are you really going to let little computer chips control it for you? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+deffd595abd9,4595126165A7,Another thing wrong with these cars is the price tag! These cars could cost up too a fortune. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+80de085675e9,4595126165A7,"Have you ever seen the ones in movies? Normal mininmun wage people could never afford these vehicals. Car companies would raise be required too raise the prices on their cars because of all the extra electronices they would have to be put in these cars , so they can make the as safe as possible. Sooner or later all of the vehials could cost over $50,000 and a lot of people have trouble making that much money over a span of 2-4 years. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2ce33124b1f9,4595126165A7,The biggest reason i am against these cars is because the issue they can cause with the law. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+495215a3e98e,4595126165A7,"I know everybody has heard of a DUI , driving under the influence, charge. You get these if you are caught driving with a alcohol level over the state law , what happens if someone is completely drunk but the car is driving itsself? Does this give people the right to be intoxicated on the rodes because if somethig happens and the driver has to take control of the wheel they could kill somebody or theirselve. I feel like people would abuse these vehicals and do everything in them that they couldn't do in a normal car because at the end of the day they aren't driving. So this really goes back too the point that these vehicals aren't safe. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bbc5ca7ca9ba,4595126165A7,"I hope after this artical people and car manufacturing companies would go back and rethink this idea. I hope they realize that these vehicals aren't the safest, can be really expensive, and will cause problems with the law. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b84b7de9e1c9,45F644FB9B80,"I personally believe that not only our state, but our nation would be better off using the Electoral College voting. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+896f2357df7a,45F644FB9B80,In my opinion elections based on popular votes would bring in more votes for a specific candidate due to the assumption that is's a fair way to vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18ac69448acc,45F644FB9B80,and it all comes back to the voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d5670f949f2,45F644FB9B80,"Yes, some other citizens might go against this claim, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3271f3b42749,45F644FB9B80,"but they don't know what it's all about. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+745303a7f3d0,45F644FB9B80,The Electoral College voting system has been around for a while ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28b9c242329e,45F644FB9B80,"What is Electoral College?
+
+by the Office of the Federal Register states that ""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by popular vote of qualified citizens."" Which proves that it's been around since the beginning of America's establishment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ef94b47c96a,45F644FB9B80,"The process of Electoral College voting consists of the selection of the electors (the people who actually get to decide on the vote casted.) Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution the District of Columbia is treated like a state, and is ""allocated 3 electors"" for the purpose of voting ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+364ea80d45d3,45F644FB9B80,The voting can be considered fair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97b220fb15c2,45F644FB9B80,"because ""each candidate has his or her own group of electors"", generally chosen by the candidate's political party,but state laws can vary that determine what or who the party consists of ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+17142bfe2270,45F644FB9B80,"Some voters may believe ""the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"", from
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2ac7cb394713,45F644FB9B80,It all comes back to the voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be815b29f649,45F644FB9B80,The represenatives from each state represent the voters from the sate they are chosen to do so. The voters vote on them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b64d1992a9fc,45F644FB9B80,"""Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, represnting 500,000 voters would have as much to say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million"", also from
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6776cbd419e7,45F644FB9B80,". Rephrasing an expert from
+
+In defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner It is the most thoughtful voters who get to decide on the election. I'm sure the states don't just choose random people, because the people that are elected by the state to vote are also from that state, and they are normal (more thoughtful) voters, who deserve to decide. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8018f177091f,45F644FB9B80,"""It can be argued that the Elecoral College method of selecting a president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope in carrying their state"" for example Democrats in Texas, or Republicans in California, ""knowing that their vote will have no effect"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a70c951813d0,45F644FB9B80,"but that's their call the VOTERS call, if they don't want to participate in the voting it's partially their fault the candidate they favor doesn't get selected. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fa34c24619dd,45F644FB9B80,"So yes, not only our states but our Nation will be better off if we keep Electoral College voting in place. Like I said in the beginning when I made my claim, elections based on popular votes would bring in more votes for a specific candidate due to the assumption that is's a fair way to vote and it all comes back to the voters. Research artiles and see for yourself. Eventually you'll swing over into the understanding. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85bd12d1b800,462F2BD14BDE,Do you really think the electoral college should stay? The second source states that Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency. Does that make any sence to you? That even though the majority votes on one thing but they dont get that in a democracy? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+52df71b75872,462F2BD14BDE,The electoral college is just a waste of time ,Position,Adequate,,,
+641ccfff82ba,462F2BD14BDE,Why would i want to do what the second source says and vote for a guy to vote for who i want to vote for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28e2f4f4e9c1,462F2BD14BDE,"The only part that makes sence is that no matter how large of an area or the bias of an area, the electoral college can not be bias ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b1bfa27d267,462F2BD14BDE,I think we should not have the electoral college. Mostly because i dont think i want to learn about swing states and run off elections and stuff. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a88bda037722,4631AFEED2F7,I think that what you are doing is wrong. Students should not be obligated to do community service if they do not want to. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6c42a18dc711,4631AFEED2F7,I do know that community service is great for helping other people or just cleaning around ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+481e9bd3d8a9,4631AFEED2F7,but some students do not want to do it and some have sports or other things to worry about and i just think it could cause so much stress to students. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+26b82ed7b976,4631AFEED2F7,"Community service should come from the heart no because one is obligated to do it , at least what you should do is tell the students that community service will give you extra credit , i am sure that many students will join immediately just because of that. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+67b8c5787d63,4631AFEED2F7,"Here is one example why you should not make it mandatory for students to provide community service, well it would cause more stress to the students. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+144358ff7f57,4631AFEED2F7,"Most students stress about homework, work at school , grades ,sports ,etc. , if they are obligated to provide community service then that would be just another thing to stress about , and i am sure nor you or the parents want to see a stressed or depressed child. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ee53add19fc,4631AFEED2F7,"Another reason is because if students do community service it is because they want to, in order for you to provide some community service it has to come from your heart ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7b84a6267cb9,4631AFEED2F7,"The majority of students that did not want to provide community service will hate it and some may even hate you. Some students might even leave the school because of that. Some rebellious students might even mess up the work that others have done in the community because they feel they do not have to work. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f25b5a3eee8c,4631AFEED2F7,I can give you many ideas though on how to get students to provide community service with out any obligation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+84affa69f569,4631AFEED2F7,"For example provide a prize for the students that do more community service, that will have students provide more community service then they use to. Also you can give them extra credits for any class, the students will have credit for every day that they provide community service, the credits begin to stock up and the students will have the option to choose any class/subject that they want or need those extra credits for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f9500dd454e0,4631AFEED2F7,"As you can see i have some good reasons on why you should not make it mandatory, but if you feel like students need to provide more community service then use some of my ideas. As a student i think that if use you use at least one of those ideas that i stated then more students would join. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+faea1f430343,46372618BF29,"We should work to abolish electoral collage, not just you and me but everyone in Florida and even in the united states. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6fd2d6180f5b,46372618BF29,It is unfair to the great hardworking people of our comunity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+360690792c94,46372618BF29,Now they don't have a say so in who's running their country. This is all due to the fact that voters are not voting for a president any more they are voting for electors who then get to vote on our president. To me its not fair for anyone not us not you and not the president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+265b269e0f1b,46372618BF29,This electoral collage has been going on sence the founding fathers establisted it a long time ago. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72df2194742d,46372618BF29,Which is saying a lot now that we have'nt tried to change it just like we have changed everything else they had set in stone a long time ago. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e155dcaabd46,46372618BF29,"To me it is just unfair, the people who live and breath in this ""great"" country don't even get to say who will manage them and make this country better. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ffb2df063a4a,46372618BF29,"The thing that doesn't make sence to me, probably because I can not vote yet, is the fact of we are going into the voting complexes (churches or schools) to vote on the president of the United States. But, insted they are actually just voting far a slate of electors who actualy get to vote on the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d8953b4d7cf,46372618BF29,"It realy grinds my gears, so to speek it isnt giving us freadom in the most free country in the world it is taking away our civil rights as citizens to vote. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+913d091bcc50,46372618BF29,The other thing that I don't like about the electoral collage is how their is an even number of electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3b96a7c77dc,46372618BF29,"At least if they are going to keep the electoral collage they should have an odd number, just so their can't be a tie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+674029bab87e,46372618BF29,The electoral collage is unconstitutional and should be taken out of the system asap. It takes away our civil librities to make this country ours. As citizens of the united states we need to work to get it abolished and only then will we truely have a great union ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ed3844050d39,4642829BC8A4,i believe that we should keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+06c127fdd675,4642829BC8A4,it not only benifits congress it aso benifits the president who is running to be our leader as well and also our electors ,Claim,Effective,,,
+98640b3e0044,4642829BC8A4,"The electoral college has been made from our founding fathers in the constitution it shows a meaning, a meaning not only to us but also to The United states and in the most part its total strangers who pick these people its a political party ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1cddb7e1cd2,4642829BC8A4,it may seem unfair that the votes we are putting in is for the electors to run but its a show of value it shows the the electors get help with votes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8a05a714a46,4642829BC8A4,and so does the president just like it may be in the other side of the green grass as well. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ad4549ca6e33,4642829BC8A4,"""The Electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+01976fb0fe22,4642829BC8A4,"(pg22). Obama gotten 61.7 percent of the electoral votes while Romney got 51.3 it seems of electors in the electorial college knew what the were doing now my gas prices isnt over 3 dollars a gallon near me  ""almost all of the states award electoral votes on a winner-takes -basis""(pg18) not only a predident is just not chosen it is a meeting that takes place where they go throughly to pick the vice prsident or the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f83f10f2f7e,4642829BC8A4,In each state the cadinate that is running for that paticular has their own group of electors that in safe hands ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+80fdde2d67c6,4642829BC8A4,its a great thing to know that people that are being chosen are being reviewed by state laws as well to be exact ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1e76e93adcd,4642829BC8A4,either way we help choose our state electors its not about the specific people its about all of us and how we contributre to the votes to our candinates in the electoral college we are not only helping the electors the electors are helping the presidnt as well and most of all we are helping United State Of America Founding Fathers. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8057eb6efc15,4645167FB476,I think it is a great idea to help the community ,Position,Adequate,,,
+570e80c08f25,4645167FB476,because there are some people that don't even care about the earth as much some other people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+811b3987d5aa,4645167FB476,also i think that when you are eating lunch you should clean up around yourself. also when you don't have anything to do you should help pick up things and you can throw it where it should be thrown in and that is the trash. After you do what you are supposed to do you can do that every day and that is how you will help our community ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43586116b20c,4645167FB476,Also when you have helped you should go to other places and if you see trash on the floor pick it up even if its not your's. Another thing is when people throw things on the floor tell them to pick it up and if they don t pick it up for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ff8ed2ee1fd,4645167FB476,and also you can help the community by telling your friends and maybe they would help you clean up litter and that way you wont be the only one helping you can be the first person to start ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f6c9ab7b20d,4645167FB476,and also you can feel really good that you aren't only helping yourself you are helping others ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1df8adf354bc,4645167FB476,and there will be a large amount of people helping the community. And you can start your own little group by you going on television and telling the people to start helping our community so that way we are not the only people helping it could travel out threw all of the earth and there will be a bigger difference. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8db833c5adf3,465810444E5F,"Due to the fact that we live in America, where we have the choice of choosing what we would like to do, (most of the time), I due believe that students should have the right to choose weather or not they want to participate in community service ",Position,Effective,,,
+941a78fd8a70,465810444E5F,"I do, however, want to sate the fact that if we do choose to do community service that our world would be a much better place. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f541cfe7579f,465810444E5F,"I don't, however, believe in forcing people to do something they don't have to do. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5d75020ce840,465810444E5F,"On the other hand. if we do community service, we would get jobs done much faster. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+618e041690c8,465810444E5F,"For example, lets say we helped out at the pound and the it was overflowing with dogs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+403c4895c64e,465810444E5F,"If we helped out the people, it wouldn't only be a nice thing to do, but you could get some benefits as well. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9848231525da,465810444E5F,Maybe they'd offer you a job or you may just feel good about helping your fellow community members. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b97b900dba8f,465810444E5F,"Another example is cleaning up trash on the highway, or anywhere really ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+140b2be324f2,465810444E5F,"That trash will add up and become a huge heap of trash. It's not healthy for you. the plants, or the animals. just imagine what could happen if a small animal ate something that was toxic to them. That wouldn't be good at all. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aa64c4ac2970,465810444E5F,"So just keep in mind that community service is a great thing to do, but if some people don't want to, you shouldn't force them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0ad6aa4939fd,465FAD6FEDC4,"I think that the principal should choose Policy 2. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+0b30e1484f3c,465FAD6FEDC4,"I think this because, cell phones distract students at school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f24ab762086d,465FAD6FEDC4,"without them, students would have all of their focus on their school work, and therefore, get better grades. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b121054187c7,465FAD6FEDC4,"Also, cell phones are bad, because through them, students could get cyber-bullied ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f644afc9058,465FAD6FEDC4,"people become less social, and communicate more through their phones, and via text message, than actual face to face, which is far more important. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10cfe83265d8,465FAD6FEDC4,"Having no cell phones would mean that people would be focused more on their school work and all that jazz, rather than on their texts, and things like gossip, rumors, etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8488b4943796,465FAD6FEDC4,"However, allowing the students to use their cell phones, would boost their morale, and make them happier ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+355b723306ba,465FAD6FEDC4,"but it is not as good a trade, cell phones, and better grades. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+897f6f9eab7a,465FAD6FEDC4,"Policy 1 may only allow them at lunch, and other free times, but that won't stop some students from using them whenever they want, and abusing their liberty. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83e5906ff1f1,465FAD6FEDC4,"Even with Policy 2, which is in use by my school, is disobeyed, and cell phones are still used, despite. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b44266bbd241,465FAD6FEDC4,"Therefore, it would be best to choose Policy 1, so as to not apply a distraction to the school day, and allow students to be more social face-to-face, rather than through technology. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2d535d631e5c,46677CD5B4C7,"I think it would be a bad idea if the school district and your self would allow everyone to bring there cell phones to school , even if there turned off during class ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1e1b789fb082,46677CD5B4C7,"I don't think its okay because its during lunch time and free periods, students should be socializing at that time ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f28ac7c44cf9,46677CD5B4C7,I also don't think that it will teach students to be more responsible for there stuff. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7dce86fd15b,46677CD5B4C7,"I do not agree because some students are mean and curl. They just don't care! They will take other people stuff, and sometimes if they don't like that person they will brake there things just to seem cool. When they are not!
+
+When all that happens the first thing they will do is run to the administration or to the principals. Then parents will get involved. It will just cause to much problems, when students should just be focused on learning and getting a good education cause that's what school is for its to be someone successful in life. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fe8bd583bf9,46677CD5B4C7,"I don't think you should allow students to bring there phones to school. There would be to many problems, and our school doesn't need that. Students just need to get a good education. Come on isn't that what schools for? For all students to be successful in life ? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+27f54bf30d04,4676279E486E,A positive aspect of driverless cars is Google cars have driven a million miles without a crash. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e7b3a087bc2,4676279E486E,"The passage states, ""Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+490ab3950f81,4676279E486E,"According to the passage, a negative aspect for driverless cars is ""Theses samrt-road systems worked suprisingly well, but they require massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical,"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77136a454eef,4676279E486E,they would be expensive to upgrade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3c0b66aabde,4676279E486E,My position on driverless cars is they would be more of a positive affect in the world. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ef6fa462251,4676279E486E,"In passage states, ""He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system."" Brin believes that the future's public transportation systems will all be driverless. Brin also believes such cars would fundamentally change the world. The passages states, ""Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10d340e4bf34,4676279E486E,"To make the cars smarter, they need to have newer systems put into the car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f89048f647d,4676279E486E,"The text states, ""they needed a whole lot of senors."" Google modified a Toyota Prius with position-estimating senors on the rear wheel. They also put a senor on the roof. Google had placed cameras and the rearview mirror. They placed four automotive radar sensors in the car along with a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion senor.
+
+The passage ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" states, ""Senors are nothing new, of course."" Automakers have been using senors for cars since the 1980s. They put them on the wheels for the creation of antilock brakes. The text states, ""Within 10 years, those senors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the dangerof out-of-control skids or rollovers."" The information from the brakes caused the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+190042d956b9,4676279E486E,The negative aspect of driverless drivers is why would anyone want a driverless car when that car still needs a driver? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3767cd74f27b,4676279E486E,"Huber states, ""We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way."" So some of the manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e1c3ccb5a1c,4676279E486E,The radar is a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6ba0f03a252,4676279E486E,"All-in-all to make a drverless car, it would be really expensive. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87af0008c8bb,4692ACEC5FF4,and i think that policy 1 is a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7cdbf98e9f7a,4692ACEC5FF4,because at lunch kids are always up to something at lease this way kids are not in trouble for doing something stupid because they would be in there phone texting and things like that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fab77435095,4692ACEC5FF4,there would not be as many fights they would be in the phone. and wouldn't care who's around just what there phone is doing and it would get there minds off the nasty school food it would keep the students busy the teachers wouldn't have to listen to kids scream as much. the teachers get to play with there phones all day why cant we play with ours at lunch. the only bad thing is it would be hard to get them to put the phones up and if they don't then u take theme up then they would learn to put there phones up when told but that is what i think it is up to you to choose what we do ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+660871fb5780,46BA696395F4,My thoughts on the google driverless car is simple. Once they are truly able to be autonomus and safe then you can put them out on the streets. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+27f58b544d51,46BA696395F4,I think that they should not be on the streets. Stating my opinion and further explain I think that they will never get to a point full reliablity. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6c9fe434c75c,46BA696395F4,what happens when an coustomer that has a self driving car hits a person without a self driving car, ,Claim,Adequate,,
+b990396d4d69,46BA696395F4,"the car company and every one involved in the accident will go to court and fight. The car company will come out on top though; the big name car company will fight so hard that they will get a bill passed that bans all humans from driving!
+
+This is also a reason that I am not for driverless cars. I dont want to be the person that is taken to the supreme court and goes against a big name car company, I dont wish that upon any one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af6187558338,46BA696395F4,I feel as If 90% is not enough for a car to be in charge. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4b8eff112c08,46BA696395F4,"The car can not go through enough simulations to know how to travel through white out conditions, or even dangerous off road terrains. When you truly think about the cost and the time to get these on the road its not worth it. I would compare this to texting and driving how many teenagers had to die before we realised it was a problem? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ef46c7667e3,46BA696395F4,We are not ready for this technology yet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7543fda18b47,46BA696395F4,In this society hackers are becoming more and more dangerous. I know these autonomus cars will have to have google maps or be connceted to some kind of network. What happens when cars start getting hacked and maipulated what do we do about? What kind of insurance would be needed and how expensive would it be? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+89d83aab3890,46BA696395F4,"Even though I am against this, I still reconginze that there could be positives to this. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2c3fe9dd9031,46BA696395F4,Every day driving tasks would be handled in a fluid and orgainzed manor. When you are in the car you could truly connect with the people inside. Long trips would turn into exiting family times. There would be no need for all seats of a car facing forward. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66dce7ed21c8,46BA696395F4,"Now refelecting on what I wrote I have realised that there is more that just safety in Inovative decisions. You have to consider what the majority of the people want. I know that many people will like this idea. My generation would be all over this, we are just a bunch of lazy tech heads. I think that self driving cars will connect with many people. Many people exept for me ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9312f4e57905,46E97FDCA469,"The article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" was a interesting factual article to read. My opion on driverless cars is they're not a good idea. I am against driverless cars ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+80f0dbdd6975,46E97FDCA469,an increasing rate of accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da169d1c467b,46E97FDCA469,"technology failing, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d92b073f3806,46E97FDCA469,the cost ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+421a6d95df57,46E97FDCA469,I am against the ideal of driverless cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+148889661eaa,46E97FDCA469,the increasing rate of accidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d382b689f50,46E97FDCA469,"Not all drivers pay attention to the road while driving (especially teens) and riding in a driverless car, coming into a situation that requires a human being to take control of the wheel can lead to accidents if they're not paying attention. The rates of car accidents are already high till this day, just imagine how high the rate would be having driverless cars. It may not even be the drivers fault, a glitch can happen with the car causing it to get into a accident injuring somebody, as said in passage 9; who's fault would it be then? The person or the manufacturers fault? That is my first reasoning opposing driverless cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55365b53146b,46E97FDCA469,the technology failing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d800e8bd8ed1,46E97FDCA469,"We live in a society where technology advances EVERYDAY, but there is always a complications with technology. Updated technology isn't always perfect. For instence the computer system in the car could crash, shutting off the whole car, there might be a hay wire causing the car to spin out of control, causing an accident, and even a more dangerous situation the car could explode or catch on fire due to the technology. An example of today's most updated piece of technology that went bad is the ""Hoover Board,"" many people could just be riding on it, and it could burst into flames. The same thing could happen with driverless cars. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da65a15eb975,46E97FDCA469,my last reasoning was the cost put into the car ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6470a705ba0,46E97FDCA469,"Many companies say they plan to have driverless cars by the year 2020, the amount of the Driverless Car would be a ridiculous amount of money. If someone were interested into buying it the first thing, they should ask themselves ""is it worth it?"" Knowing the bad outcomes that could possibly happen. Not only would the car be super expensive, but also having to fulfill the tank with gas, and gas nowadays isn't the cheapest. But the most important question asking yourself before buying the expensive piece of technology, is it really worth how much it costs? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ebfc0556e86,46E97FDCA469,"In conclusion, I am against driverless cars. The reasons are, increasing rate of accidnets, technology failing, and the cost. I myself would not buy this knowing the reprecautions. That is why I am against the ideal of Driverless Cars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3ea676014145,4722B4D2C6E7,"In the United States, every student is required to receive a K-12 education. Since technology has become such a big aspect of people's lives, many schools have started to offer online classes. This means that students have the ability to attend their classes from home. With the ability to learn from home, people have started to discuss whether or not this opportunity is beneficial for students ",Lead,Effective,,,
+904f00581c34,4722B4D2C6E7,Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+06156b3f392a,4722B4D2C6E7,schools create a good environment for face-to-face help ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e6f5ed01a6f8,4722B4D2C6E7,"there are less distractions in schools, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d1b4b13ce4d1,4722B4D2C6E7,"schools promote projects to improve life skills. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+12f59c19f27a,4722B4D2C6E7,"First, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because schools create a good environment for face-to-face help ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1cbb5bfc0f4e,4722B4D2C6E7,"Although technology has made many daily tasks easier, school is a place that shouldn't be taken lightly, and has endless advantages. One of the biggest advantages of taking classes at school is being able to receive help from peers and teachers whenever a student needs it. This may not seem like much, but having the opportunity to get face-to-face help whenever it's necessary can make a big difference on a student's academic success. Not to mention, there are minimal distractions in school that make learning easier than at home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7c356e553b83,4722B4D2C6E7,"Next, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because there are less distractions in schools. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+746562b2f2f8,4722B4D2C6E7,"A student's home is a place for relaxation and minimal work. When a person thinks about relieving stress at the end of the day, they think about going home. At home, it's easy to get distracted by the little things. It may just be a pet or the TV, but all of these things result in taking important learning time away from a student's day. At school, a student doesn't have time to get distracted. Lessons are taught and good amounts of work are assigned so a student stays busy. For example, if a student that learns from home has to write an essay, they are more likely to get distracted by the things in their home then get it done. However, a student that learns at school would get their essay done, knowing that it's easier to stay on task then get behind because of distractions. Having less distractions isn't the only positive of learning at school though. A student also gets to work on projects that will help them in their future lives. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+959beae18fae,4722B4D2C6E7,"Lastly, students would not benefit from learning from home because learning at school pushes students to do projects, which improve life skills ",Claim,Effective,,,
+961f87077f66,4722B4D2C6E7,"Projects have always been a way for students to collaborate with their peers. It may not seem like much, but projects teach teamwork, leadership, and knowledge skills. Projects also emphasize the importance of making friends and compromising with others to achieve success. Learning from home deprives students from working with their peers. The only way a student gets to be in contact with another person is if a student is video conferencing a teacher or staff member. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1a17de2f4d85,4722B4D2C6E7,"
+Some people may say that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b6bcc4d2f374,4722B4D2C6E7,"Attending classes from home makes it easier for students to get an education without having to commute to schools. Not to mention, if a student didn't have to commute to school, they would have more free time to do extracurricular activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+337a5022214a,4722B4D2C6E7,"However, students would not benefit from learning from home because schools offer face-to-face help, minimal distractions, and project-based learning that helps students learn essential life skills. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+798491f76997,47349AAB5C12,I think there is some good things about the Electroal College but some things I do not agree ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+91d9c3ca5435,47349AAB5C12,Overall I believe that we should change the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+376d8ed69e7c,47349AAB5C12,It takes to much time add all the votes and the persents to see who got the most of the votes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e17f7ed4ce42,47349AAB5C12,Than the senate and the house of representative talk about is and check if they counting is right. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+647c103d26f3,47349AAB5C12,Not every one gets to vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+692f2a16c19d,47349AAB5C12,Maybe if all people got to vote it will be better and will be ble to find out a better count because each state has so many  electoral votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eee860639d94,47349AAB5C12,The thing I don't like is that not everyone has the right to vote and the should. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8faad6bb5b38,47349AAB5C12,"It should be a freedom to vote after this is a free country. We also have the freedom of speech why can't we have a freedom to vote. I may understand that not all people are from this country but reall who is thatb is what make us different but, if we would understand it well be better for every to vote. That way it will be more fair than having only those that qulify. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+059b1f5f27b8,47349AAB5C12,Another thing is that when we vote the add up how mant people voted for this person and how many voted for the other and that n there they decided who won that state. add up the electoral vote but what happens to the other who wanted the other person they get pushed away and it should be like that. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+182e88b5cb1b,47349AAB5C12,Those people should get a say in who the want too not automaticly be part of the one who won that state. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aa9ff9eeccdb,47349AAB5C12,"We should change the way we vote for our persident in the way it will become more equal and not asume it is right. To me the elctoral college just rounds up the vote in the state elector. We should and give everyone a chance too vote of course they would be 18 and older but, aleast to try maybe the outcome well be better and more fair towards to election. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0903363d5cde,473FF163E44A,Yes i think yes its can by a benefit to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+60dcaa076fa7,473FF163E44A,"because many students come late in the school and the teachers sometimes they mark they students are absents or late, but may the school can give the opportunity to who work or to who need it because many student we are working in at the night and sometimes we see many of they students sleep in classes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6d984683d0c5,473FF163E44A,if we attend classes from home that will by better because we will sleep more time at home ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+df866c7a9bec,473FF163E44A,we will don't come at the school every day or wake up the same time all day ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05a5ef4e1098,473FF163E44A,but the teachers will by attent for their students who has take their classes from home to send their work or to help they students when they don't understand or sometimes we stock to do or how to do and then the teachers will by help. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+28dc6f5f54c5,473FF163E44A,But is a bad idea to because many students are may don't wants to doing all they work at home because they knowing they are home and when we are home we prefer doing others things except the school work ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+815841963bb8,473FF163E44A,"and that can by a problem when we take the test because many students can fail their test, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1c6b434c68b,473FF163E44A,because in home we can find the answers in internet or anywhere but when we are in the school every day we can't use our phone or anything to find the answers because the teachers wants to test us what are we know or what we are need to know to by better and to resolve all you'r work in you'r own idea may the teaher can give you some ideas or examples or explain how you can do it but is diferent like when you finding the answer in internet because ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83b92474d1ce,473FF163E44A,the internet can give you all the answer and yuo will be no learn nothing because it's just copy what are you see except ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3108e8539133,473FF163E44A,with the teachers you learn more because they tell to you to try to do it in your own and you have an idea to what are you going to do. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+367245c03c30,473FF163E44A,_And it can by hard for the students to graduate because can affect they attend in the school and will many students going to skiping because they can come in the school but they can leave early because they can find a excuse to to leave and to do the attendece at home or just skiping classes and don't doing nothing. Well it okay to come in the school every day because if one has attend in home then all students wasts to have attend at home  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0cf9c7af8eb3,47470951BBDB,"Do you remember a time you hated cleaning you house?
+
+Well if people hate doing that imagine them doing community service and how that don't have air conditioning like a house do its outside in the hot sunny day and just have water to drink sweet coming down your face. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+487132f667eb,47470951BBDB,"some people complain of what they have and what they don't have, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6f53a46db437,47470951BBDB,how hard it is to keep on cleaning everyday of their life. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3e3cee7df337,47470951BBDB,the best thing to have is a beautiful place to live but we wont have that if we don't keep our self together and keep our environment clean because if we don't then we would be living in a nasty ugly place then a nice and beautiful one like North Carolina how sweet and beautiful the air is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d035005b58d7,47470951BBDB,But some people are to selfish to give up a little bet of their time to help and keep our community safe and clean for each another i mean how hard is it. Why would they rather live in a nasty dirty place? we should all in school accepted to work together and do community service and change mother earth and livings around us. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62cdf057d841,47470951BBDB,i think we should do community service don't you? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+113c6de4a2cc,47650F5F247C,It is unfair to not allow students to participate in after school activities if the student doesn't get at least a B average. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+57b8d424350c,47650F5F247C,This completely unfair to students because after school activities allow students to express themselves outside school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f9c0a3e3c71,47650F5F247C,"Students are unable to express themselves in the classroom, but after school activities really allow students to be themselves.
+
+It is unfair that school can dictate how a student chooses to express themselves. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+20db700ee648,47650F5F247C,Not having after school activities can also affect the student's grades because after school activities can relieve stress with schoolwork ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4488ba82414f,47650F5F247C,"if that student is unable to have after school activities, and just schoolwork to think about, they would be more stressful with school and it could really affect their focus.
+
+This then could affect the students grades.
+
+A students grade could get even worse without after school activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5183215002d,47650F5F247C,"A student's schoolwork, and social life should be kept individually.
+
+After school activities is a great chance for students to relieve stress with schoolwork, and let students to do something outside of school that they really enjoy doing.
+
+Students shouldn't have to focus on school all the time because other activities are just as important in helping a student grow. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+91423ecd5e55,4797D4343628,Honestly sir/ma'm i think that it would be way better if we just changed our election on popular vote instead of having it as an electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2185513460c,4797D4343628,Me personally i think that the whole electoral college thing is kinda dumb mainly because what it stated. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ba069371cc8a,4797D4343628,"That paragraph mainly talked about how the electoral college consist of 538 electors, and 270 votes are required to elect the president ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+871390c47cd0,4797D4343628,"Honestly it probably wouldnt be as difficult if you just voted on most popular. For example the ""disaster factor"" was named the single best argument and that was about how americans should be lucky that that 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e832f83c611,4797D4343628,"Im not gunna lie there was a little bit of some negatives effect. For example if we would of did popular votes when president John F. Kennedy ran, he would of lost the election and had not became our prsident. Lucily we didnt change the system then, am i right. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+228cde0a8cbe,4797D4343628,Although it has some negatives there is way more positive effects. Im not saying using the electoral college way is bad because they do have some good cause, ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,
+c3d20f84ae3b,4797D4343628,"for example there is atleast 5 good reasons. Hopefully you know all 5 but ill tel you my top 3 reasons on how the electoral college has some good effects. On good positive effect is how hey say it, ""Everyone's President"". What they mean by that is like how no region would have enough votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorie like Romeny was in the south had no incentive to campian heavily in those states. another good reason was named ""Big States"". They meant like every big state like Texas lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a755ae4f407e,4797D4343628,"One last reason was known as ""Swing States"". ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7b0045cbcc07,4797D4343628,By that they meant like what had happened with Nixon and Clinton. They both had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes while winning a major in the electoral college. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac7e17c5bf8f,4797D4343628,But like i said there is still some negatives about it and my opinion like i said was to vote on popularity. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+01966060a424,47A7E2D63D3B,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming,"" the author describes where the cars are now and how they are effecting society. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+610f0bfb7e67,47A7E2D63D3B,"Even, after reading the passage, I don't believe that driverless cars should be a reality right now.
+
+Maybe in a few years, when changes are made for safety precautions, but in the now, we can handle driving on our own. ",Position,Effective,,,
+48df96d29f22,47A7E2D63D3B,"Having the ""smart roads"" equipped with electrical cable or magnets, as General Motors and Berkeley engineers did in paragraph 3, would never work with rebuilding all new roads all over the world just for these cars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1fdaf77f106d,47A7E2D63D3B,"Imagine the time and money spent just for these roads to be built.
+
+And what will happen once the passengers are on a road without these ""smart"" adaptions?
+
+Because of this, the next version of this driverless car is to rather equip the car with sensors and not the road itself as the Toyata Prius did in paragraph 4. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa6938cb8f87,47A7E2D63D3B,"But no matter how many sensors, lasers, or recievers you have on this driverless car, artificial intelligence will never be as smart as human intelligence. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3a1a948cba96,47A7E2D63D3B,"What will happen when a deer jumps out from a field, a pedestrian rides his bike, a child's ball bounces out from her yard, or a pothole comes near comes bouncing from her yard? Will the sensors and lasers notice the change and react as fast a human would?
+
+Even if there is still a driver in the seat, as said in paragraph 8, what will keep their attention on the road and not fixated on their phone or other passengers?
+
+No amount of buzzing or flashing lights will get the attention of the driver to whatever accident may occur quick enough to make a change.
+
+If anything, the displays will make the driver panic in such a way that will make their safety decline further. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+09e13d99e260,47A7E2D63D3B,Driverless cars are especially targeted to keep those who would normally drive while under the influence of alchohol and others safe from them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+13879d69d599,47A7E2D63D3B,"But once again, what if something should come between the car and where the car wants to go?
+
+The ""driver"" under the influence of alchohol cannot to anything otherwise, especially with the displays distracting the driver further.
+
+Without these driverless cars those under the influence would normally grab a taxi or ride home with a friend, but with the driverless cars, he/she would be a potential threat. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c31adc316e8,47A7E2D63D3B,"having driverless cars in the world would not be nearly as safe as human intelligence.
+
+The driverless cars will be more of a distraction on to the passengers and essentially, will not help any of the passengers nor pedestrians around them.
+
+There are much too many scenarios that could go wrong rather than if a human driver was actually in control. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+993c2f3991c5,47D025408E0F,"There are many things that can benefit from community service, there are also many things that can not be beneficial. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+72bfde5ec440,47D025408E0F,One of the things that can benefit from community service is responsibility ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32038c89b326,47D025408E0F,The reason i choose this as a beneficial reasoning is because many kids need respect now days. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+574e09fe7166,47D025408E0F,"Another reason would be to learn how to handle things outside home and school, but also learn how to handle things at home and in school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6d05504e111,47D025408E0F,There are also bad things that aren't beneficial from community service. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5d13f0a6a8cc,47D025408E0F,"This is because some kids need time to focus on school priorities as well. For example, say you had an essay paper to do but you had to do community service but you don't finish later. By then you would have forgotten about the paper and you would have also been tired. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+06892556ee19,47D025408E0F,so there is no good outcome from community service as much as there is a beneficial outcome. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+967620ef155b,47F56748F9C4,I don't want to keep the Electoral College I want to have Election by popular vote for the next president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1a66f22d484c,47F56748F9C4,Because if you have a vote who comptabled to more vote than another vote of citizens it's not fair... ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+75bae4bae131,47F56748F9C4,"If you give one vote for one citizens and one vote for all people who leave in United States that's more fairy for the candidat for the Presidential Electoral and for the citizens, 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+14ed73e823b9,47F56748F9C4,"I think it's as better idea because the election are more fairy and the president can look how many people vote for him after, why a citizens cannot have plus votes than a Electoral College why? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+81bd294c096e,47F56748F9C4,If you give more votes to a citizen  I think you can have a problem ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b0ab1bbcef33,47F56748F9C4,"because if one citizen have three or four votes there are so much votes and if all the Electoral College votes for the same candidat. He has got more chances be elected maybe. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0bbd48c8d92c,47F56748F9C4,It's my personal oppinion ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6c9fee4d39df,4819AB11D62A,"Well, I think that students should have community service because it will help people and make them feel happy. ",Position,Effective,,,
+3016e75043f7,4819AB11D62A,"If you go to the nursing home and help the old people, they will feel very good. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+beac7faa2366,4819AB11D62A,"If you pick up trash from the side of the road, then people in the community will think that you did a good job. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c34714a411b8,4819AB11D62A,Their children might not come and visit them and help them. So they want to be really happy if their about to die or their really sick. You will also feel good after you do something good for them. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+72e4e8d2327b,4819AB11D62A,What will they think? They'll probably think that the students or adults don't do anything for the community. So not just juveniles should pick up the trash for the community. High school students and adults should just volunteer to pick up trash on the side of the road. instead of getting paid for it. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+53a81452168c,4819AB11D62A,"So why shouldn't students and adults that don't have jobs do the volunteer work. We should be really nice to the community because its a great place to live at. We should also be nice to the old people because their old, some are sick, and some might die soon. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+836eedf38d47,483B15E6B6DE,I don't think it is right for you to change our school policy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+caa4bd363040,483B15E6B6DE,Because students you are really good at playing sports should be allowed to play no matter what. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7b242fe5391,483B15E6B6DE,Because they really work hard at doing their best to impress the coach and work hard at the sports they love. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1edf161ce461,483B15E6B6DE,"I think you should consider the student that have at least one A, B, or C in class to play in school activities and to play school sports. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8e26261d613,483B15E6B6DE,"Half the school students get at least a grade average of a ""C"" so why change if half the school is doing better. the other half is trying to their grades up gut some things get hard for some people. You should let the students play the sports because not all students are going to get a ""B"" average in school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fa6355e34ca,483B15E6B6DE,To see what they can do and if there are behaving badly just pull them out of the sport they are playing. and tell them they cant play until next try-outs. And hopefully they will make the team those try-outs. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+781797091e1c,483B15E6B6DE,"To be honest I don't like playing sports because I am really bad at sports well some of them i am good but most bad. so you wont be seeing me playing any sports, only the sports i like to play . but you really should let the students who have at least a ""c"" average to in the sports you say that's aloud to play at the right tome of the year. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cfc3e9c77282,483B15E6B6DE,But i think you should like get the kids who are foot-ball players and form a foot-ball team at our school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1cc600d8c973,483B15E6B6DE,For at least two months or one month that would like be so much fun and get cheerleaders to represent our team and school. iam just putting ideas out there for you ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7bda2ae6513d,484C49CBDA30,I would say that we keep the Electoral College because it has worked over the past century so why change it now. ,Position,Effective,,,
+8eedbdbc2d9e,484C49CBDA30,The people voting don't always know what they want in a president they might be undecided and just choose the best looking one ,Claim,Effective,,,
+10bfd5f1dd81,484C49CBDA30,I mean yeah some have their facts straight and know how the president they are voting is going to help the united states become a better country overall ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b824087cd742,484C49CBDA30,When people have to much freedom they don't know what to do and do wrong choices so i think choosing a elector is a good thing they have studied the president and have heard countless promises that he has done. I mean he or she most likley will vote for the candiate running for president you did because he or she is a elector he or she gets the people who also voted for the same person as he or she wants. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c3709c604753,484C49CBDA30,I mean we people are still voting we still have the vote just that our vote goes to choosing a certain elector instead of just directly leaving it to the people to vote for a ceratin candiate running for president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f5bd76590fe,484C49CBDA30,"By this the number is much smaller since each country is weighed and is worth certain points and decided by electors you choosed to trust to vote for the same president you did. You still are in control just that you choose somebody he/her is not likely to change his or her mind and vote for the exact person you want he or she to vote for. It stated in the article that ""Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candiate's politcal party."" I say that if the candidate political party chooses the electors then they must be good and the party must be sure the elector won't change his mind out of no where. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+954f35920360,484C49CBDA30,This does make the candiate running for president try to convience the electors he is the one they need and that he will help our country be better. This also helps the candiate running for president know what states he should go to since some states they already know they lost ,Claim,Effective,,,
+962c9db5316c,484C49CBDA30,"It stated in the article that ""A solid regional favorite, such as Romney was in the south,has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win.""So this keeps the president from having to go to every state because its just no based of popular vote and want every individual person votes for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+77a5c1b58da4,484C49CBDA30,I think the Electoral college is great and well organized the process is good and the only thing is does is make the voting process more easier and ordered. I think we should keep it i mean it has had his troubles her and there but it has worked so good for such a long time. We don't want to change it and create choas since a lot of people are not use to change and don't take it quite well ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aa6e012494d0,4858280EA8BC,"I STUDENT_NAME, have decided to write a letter to you that might be able to help you on this debate.
+
+I hear that you have been considering giving all students that attend your school community service.
+
+I may have some suggestions that suit you. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aba656584944,4858280EA8BC,"My main suggestion for you first and foremost is to try giving out a survey to all of the students that attend your school.
+
+The main reason I say this is so that you know what your students mainly do with their day.
+
+And so you know whether or not they have time to attend this community service. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5d3bf0ab38a8,4858280EA8BC,"For example; some students may have learning disabilities or maybe even have trouble understanding the work.
+
+Or the students could have personal problems.
+
+Such as suffering from depression, trouble at home or school, or even worse, etc.
+
+All these situations could be effecting students in their every day lives. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba1ad34138a2,4858280EA8BC,"I hope that I've made a very large and positive impact on others lives.
+
+Because others have made one on my life.
+
+So I hope that you take some time and think about this letter before you make any final decisions.
+
+Because that one decision could impact many peoples lives in all sorts of ways. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+340cfd3f1a02,486B53D5F8A0,I realize that you have been wondering if you should require all students to perform community service. In this letter i am going to give my opinion on what i think. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+453ab1ae8939,486B53D5F8A0,"In my opinion, i think you should make all students perform some type of community service. ",Position,Effective,,,
+54bcf99699d5,486B53D5F8A0,I think this is a good idea so that students will be more involved in their community ,Claim,Effective,,,
+35b7905c0faa,486B53D5F8A0,"and so that our community will become a better one. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d4b6f3e0433,486B53D5F8A0,"For example, if students all come together to work they will become more aware of their own homes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c5a615f6350,486B53D5F8A0,Students may even meet new people and get to know more people who live in the area. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e644cf359989,486B53D5F8A0,"One thing that could happen is our area will become cleaner. Because of this, there could be more people walking or more business. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1633c72c4f12,486B53D5F8A0,"Lastly, i would like to explain that i also think that not every student should participate in certain community service. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7b966f9f1e7c,486B53D5F8A0,I think this because sometimes not all students may have time to help with bigger service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de4ded14d76e,486B53D5F8A0,Some students may not even want to help. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae4b4a941cb2,486B53D5F8A0,I think that we should only let people that are willing to help perform community service help with bigger projects. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d081c984e77,486F1C72E20D,To me I think we should change the election by popular vote for the president ,Position,Effective,,,
+07d0a975cf4a,486F1C72E20D,the citizens deserve to vote on who ever they think will help are country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c7a605851f5,486F1C72E20D,If they make the wrong decsion the it would be there fault and they wouldnt have no one else to blame but themselves for choosing that president or who ever they wanted to win ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6fcf8eeeaf4,486F1C72E20D,"Also, if the person does make a mistake they should be able to unelect them also cause people need what is best for are country. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9204b3b2be64,486F1C72E20D,When people elect the president they usally go back through there speaches and see what they had promised for our country and make sure it is what they want. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c043799df543,486F1C72E20D,If it is not what they want they would probably go to the next person who is trying to be the president. When you are electing always make sure you are mking the right decision and make sure that they please you because they could elect that person because of yur vote you never no what could happen when voting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+570d09e708ad,486F1C72E20D,Well i dont think it is because they made the country to a bad situation or even smething dangerous like a war. But if they did keep the Electoral College i dont think they would care about the citizens of the united states I think that they would only care bout themselves and whats gonna please them and not everyone else. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+aa8919b52aa6,48898FA30C5B,I think you should allow students to have cell phones in school. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6c33c205f9cc,48898FA30C5B,I think that as long as they aren't using them in class it should be alright to have it with them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dabaa0911176,48898FA30C5B,"The only time students should be allowed to use them are during lunch periods, free times they have in school, in class if the teacher approves, but not in quiet places like the library. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+790241ad2313,48898FA30C5B,Students should be allowed to have them because in many schools teachers don't let the students use their phones because of either previous things that have happened or because they don't trust the students. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d71e3434e1c0,48898FA30C5B,Another reason they might not let students use their phone is because they just don't think they should ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+112aeab4d448,48898FA30C5B,Students not being able to have phones in school can be a bad thing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ee2e7295adc,48898FA30C5B,"For an example, if there is a fire or something bad has happened the teachers won't let the students call home or tell their parents they are alright. That would be bad for the students and the school because if the students don't call their parents they would be highly upset and it would be bad for the teachers and schools because many parents would be calling up to the school to make sure everything is okay. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6081fa2e134,48898FA30C5B,Another reason I think you should let students bring their phones to school is because if a student is in trouble or someone is trying to fight them they can call their parents and get picked up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0296ece0539,48898FA30C5B,This would help the students and principals/staff in the school because they won't have to deal with the drama. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0816e0350785,48898FA30C5B,Another reason is because many students need their phones for numbers or directions to places they need to be after school or if they are leaving during school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+276218437324,48898FA30C5B,My last reason is that if a close family member in a students family has died the parents can call their child to tell them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20913d1bb3a8,48898FA30C5B,"Cell phones are very important in students and parents lives. Now, if you have a child and something important happened or something happened that you needed to know about and the teacher wouldn't let your child call you wouldn't you be upset or worried? That's how many parents feel when they can't reach their child. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86a502412b3a,48898FA30C5B,Please consider this letter and think about how important it is for a child to bring their cell phone to school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a8b2ce437b18,4899B96D932B,"Dear, state senator I think we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e7659a64ab5c,4899B96D932B,"I think this because the Electoral College does not seem fair, the president that usually wins in popular vote loses to the vote for presidency, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e124e0931d67,4899B96D932B,"it is considered a non-democratic method for selecting a president, and it is all up to the electors of a candidate. The Electoral College should also be changed to popular vote because it is not the people who are choosing the president, it is the three electors sent from each different state. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a5e8ae6117bb,4899B96D932B,"The Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote, because it is not fair to the candidates. This is because most presidents that win the popular vote section of the election then end up losing the presidential vote section ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba371b5abc5f,4899B96D932B,"an example of this is when candidate Al Gore recieved the most individual votes when running against George W. Bush, but Bush won the electoral section, recieving two hundred and seventy-one against Al Gore's two hundred and sixty-six. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cd25de6111e,4899B96D932B,"The Electoral college is also unfair to voters, because of all of the states winner take-all system of government, and in seventeen states they did not get a chance to see the candidates. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9ddb0ec2731,4899B96D932B,"Most people believe the Electoral College is outdated and irrational, a person named Bob Dole, believes that the Electoral College should be completely abolished. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67a512259a17,4899B96D932B,"Another big problem in the Electoral College is segregationists who do everything to go against certain parties and their candidates, like the time in 1960 a group of segregationists almost succeeded in their effort to get rid of all democratic electors so that new electors would be opposed to John F. Kennedy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df8dec07d260,4899B96D932B,"The Electoral College should also be changed to election by popular vote, because people consider it non-democratic. This is because the voting is all up to the electors selected by each of the different states, meaning that the actual people of the state have no power in the election of the candidates for president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bdb26b949f9b,4899B96D932B,"When the people of the state take their vote for the candidates they are actually voting for potential electors who will then go represent the selected candidate, this gives rise to problems like corrupt electors who are dishonest and using cheating tactics, also most states know that their votes will do nothing to help the candidates being represented, examples would be the Democrats in Texas and the Republicans in California. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7eb9d1103e87,4899B96D932B,It is also believed that the Electoral College makes potential voters not want to vote at all and they end up not representing their candidates. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b663a9ac196,4899B96D932B,"And most people already have a certainty of the outcome of the election, meaning they already know who will win the election based on the number of votes so far in the popular votes section and the electoral section. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+02660b3bcfaf,4899B96D932B,"The system of electors is also not fair because the people can not control who they are voting for has the electors, and the states number of electors are equal to the number of people on its congressional delegation, which gives big states an advantage over small states. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ff32f3702a2,4899B96D932B,"To conclude this letter, I again say that the Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote because, popular vote is fairer then the Electoral College, the people have no power compared to the electors and the are subject to corruption with in the system. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a36207ba7f4b,48B50A9C7D0F,I as a student here at your school do not think students should be forced to do community service ,Position,Effective,,,
+f5e0113fbede,48B50A9C7D0F,"We do not have enough time, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+87b189b61d0f,48B50A9C7D0F,some of us are not capable ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9db952b54cfd,48B50A9C7D0F,this would put to much power in the hands of the school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+30a2eda54793,48B50A9C7D0F,"When practice starts we would have to be doing service and coaches would become very angry as well as the students because of missed practices. If we have test the next day at school and we have to do well on it to pass the class we might not be able to because we were being forced to do service.
+
+Just because of you we would fail our classes and our sports. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8852a8ed405f,48B50A9C7D0F,The have broken arm or ankle and can't really do anything. Also some are not all there mentally and would probably hurt more than they helped. So then instead of trying to help our town you hurt it because you force unfit students to do service. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d91f7044fb4d,48B50A9C7D0F,Our schedules are all ready revolve around school and this would make it way to difficult for us. We have the right do what we want under restraints of the law according to the law. The school does not have the right to force us to do community service. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ce26f5b1b3c,48B50A9C7D0F,I hope you will be swayed in favor my proposal after you see it is the only logical option. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cea3f3bba0a8,48B7B61CE51A,I think that policy 1 is better because when you have free time what will you do? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+83f6852a2d4e,48B7B61CE51A,If you tell students to read when they have free time that's not really free time because they're still working. I will give you some reasons why i think that policy 1 is better then policy 2. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84bc1dcbc525,48B7B61CE51A,One reason why policy 1 is better is because if you tell students to read a book when they have free time they won't want to do it because they've been working all day. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+170c15bd0a45,48B7B61CE51A,So if students don't want to do something they're not going to do it. Most of the time when you tell students to do something they don't want to do they start disrupting class and getting in trouble. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5e84f80b668,48B7B61CE51A,Another reason is because students do it without permission anyway. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+463ded37166a,48B7B61CE51A,So giving them the right to have their phone out during free time will help a lot of people stay out of trouble. This would be a good policy to make because almost everyday people get their phone taken away for pulling it out during class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df7fb5bb5e8d,48B7B61CE51A,If you make policy 2 a rule it won't make a difference because students are still going to do it anyway ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cf40a27c7f5,48B7B61CE51A,So you would be way better off with making policy 1 a rule. Policy 1 would stop a lot of people from getting their phone taken. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a853f8252c34,48B7B61CE51A,The last reason i can think of is students might actually do their work so they can have their phone out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f850fe098e88,48B7B61CE51A,I believe that will pull up a lot of students grades. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f47fd09e8a67,48B7B61CE51A,hope you decide to choose this policy because i think it would really help students bring up their grade and stay out of trouble. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c86768aad26,48D1D86D5110,The Electoral College is not a place but a process. The Electoral College process consists of the slection of the electors. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+83fad456a6ac,48D1D86D5110,"the electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c64b00c686ff,48D1D86D5110,""" Its official : the eclectoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational."" The electoral college is not fair to voters even at the most basic level. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07df6aadf1d2,48D1D86D5110,Some states dont even get to see the candidates because they dont spend any time in states they know they dont have a chance of winning in. During the 2000 compaign seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all because of the winner- take- all system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+285ed5662e9b,48D1D86D5110,The electoral college does restore some of the weight in the political balance in large states. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e5c0104d5392,48D1D86D5110,"Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over sixty percent would perfer a direct vote than have the elctoral college vote also. The vote could be very close even if one candidate wins by much in the popular vote due to the presidency vote. If there was a tie in the electoral vote the election would be thrown to the House of Represenstatives. Instead of all that work if there was only a popular vote it would be quick and simple. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40e3a9d7f344,48D1D86D5110,"Voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a singke ad campaign because the candidates didnt think they could win there. ""If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidnecy in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it...."". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26404312f540,48D1D86D5110,The best arguments in favor of the electoral college not being good are mostly assertions withiout much basis in reality. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8b7a4c4561ce,48D1D86D5110,"Electoral college is a process which is irrational, unfair and outdated.                      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+68d92baadeac,4905342C1EF9,The argument of keeping The Electoral College is a big argument because the federal goverment is trying to take the electoral college out ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bf338a23d996,4905342C1EF9,"I think that they should keep the electoral college because they are many electors that vote for president and they alsio vote for canidates, so theres no reason they should take out the electoral college. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2ca2e6ac0f19,4905342C1EF9,One reason they should take down the electoral college is to same money because some of the goverments money  goes to that college that they dont pay for. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+1b2ecfa9d103,4905342C1EF9,"for all these reasons i thinki they shoudnt take down the college, because where would the votes from the electors go. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+387af8d7118c,4905342C1EF9,When they heard that the wanted to take down the college all of the electors were kind of furious because the electoral college is where they go to vote for presidents and vote for canidates ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+463f8dc37068,4905342C1EF9,Another reason is that the electoral college is taking too much money for the goverments votes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ad620efeef9c,4905342C1EF9,Conclusion for these reason the goverment want to take down the electoral college for the electors. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e5d5fe1adf77,49083564C202,"Are driverless cars good or bad? Reliable or unproductable? Can they benifit us in the future? Or will it cause danger?.
+
+For many years scientists have tested cars that can make driving alot easier for us in the near future. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+984d8f2b9216,49083564C202,I honestly think driverless cars are an unproductable invention and can cause danger. ,Position,Effective,,,
+aeccc2054dd2,49083564C202,It seems to me that it may or will cause alot more accidents than texting while driving or drinking while driving. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7e2a2232fc12,49083564C202,"For example, say if there are driverless cars in the future, and you or a group of friends are going on a road trip. The car is on auto pilot and you are drinking or texting, reading, listening to music, and/or perhaps sleeping. The car may not signal or warn you that their is traffic, or on road construction uphead. The car may cause you to get in trouble for not paying attention and taking control when neccassary, and/or may cause a horrbile accident. This can and will cause conflict between you and the manufacturer. This can cause a huge debate on driverless cars ; are they dependent and reliable enough or are self service cars safer?. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ed054a437456,49083564C202,"Driverless cars may indeed help those who are in need of going from one place to another such as senior citizens, legally blind, etc. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5b87bd1aefcf,49083564C202,"But it may also put them in danger without them knowing. Another example, if you are a handicap, legally blind, or deaf, you may be in grave danger. The car again is on autopilot and is driving through a neighborhood and there are signs everywhere to when and where to stop, if there is construction, or there are people crossing the streets. You come to a stop at a stop sign, you are not paying attention, you are oblivious to your surroundings when doing other things. The car will go head but there is a car coming from the other side of the street where there is no stop sign. You and the other person collide. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b061d78b905b,49083564C202,"the car is supposed to be an upgrade, advanced in technology. The car has sensors to sense if there is danger ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+efc38915e62e,49083564C202,"but the car may have a flaw. This again will bring conflict and debate. This can lead people to believe that driverless cars are unsafe and unproductive and is a liabilty. But say you were paying attention to your surroundings, instictively, you would look left and right. The car will go foward but, there is a car coming from the other side (remember there is no stop sign for the other car to stop at) you and that person collide. Again, the car is to have warned you but if you were alert, you would have taken control of the car when driving through a neighborhood. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8c434c26b080,49083564C202,"Either way to me, driverless cars are dangerous no matter what. There not industructible and cannot always be depended on. They may be smart and advance but even the greatest technology can be a danger and liability. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+007fd8eb752d,490C2D42AFCE,Mr. senator i think we should get rid of the electoral college and change to popular votefor the presidency. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+42aec5c4b081,490C2D42AFCE,I know im not even old enough to vote yet and your probably thinking what is this kid talking about but i dont think it is right to vote for the president of the united states canidate and really not even vote for him. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18b6bb666f4e,490C2D42AFCE,The electoral college should vote for us because believe it or not it isnt always the right desicion sometimes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f78a20fa9a9,490C2D42AFCE,They say people of age and an american citazen that we can vote then let them vote for who they want they shouldnt have to vote really for an elector people want to feel like there vote matters. The peoples votes should go right to the box and count the votes and see who wins. The electoral college is of no need for the election process we the people can vote for ourselfs please just let us. And i know it isnt really in the writing format the way they want it i just want you to know my oppinoin and i know your probably going to just skim right over this but please if you have the time just please read over this and take the time to understand were im coming from.    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac0744d2938b,4933B56F9E7B,You should keep the electoral college vote the same without the popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e63b42507c2a,4933B56F9E7B,because the winning candiate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bffa95e2f36,4933B56F9E7B,Aswell as the electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae06e24d6c74,4933B56F9E7B,"To begin, the reason is that the winning candidate's share of the electoral college invairably exceeds his share of the popular vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd1cba173cea,4933B56F9E7B,"for example in the 2012 election, Oboma received 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to 51.3 percent of the popular votes. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is very possible like the total number of votes-538-is an even number, but it is highly unlikely. It is less likely to have a dispute over the popular vote but it is more likely to have a dispute over the electoral vote. In 2012's election voters in toss-up states are most likely to pay close attention to the campaign- to really listen to the competing canidates- knowing they are going to decide the election. Causing the popualr vote to go up. When we as a community should not want to president be chosen by a popular vote but by the electoral vote, it is only fair! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96c84f91870d,4933B56F9E7B,"Also, the electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives majority of the votes cast. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed4a5ba75b73,4933B56F9E7B,"For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning the majority in the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46bcb0e38a83,4933B56F9E7B,"Did you know that there is someone from a small state and they only get three electoral votes. Well, they are not treated equal and only the large states get more of the attention from presidential candidates than a small state ever will. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9e1a1a89425f,4933B56F9E7B,It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f6ad11f72d90,4933B56F9E7B,You should keep the electoral college vote the same without the popular vote because the winning candiate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. Aswell as the electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives majority of the votes cast. So I'm going to leave you with this. What will you choose? The popular vote of the electoral vote? It's up to you not. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+633398c9f8d4,49586CD6A649,"The Face isn't an alien artifact. It wasn't created by aliens, it's just a natural landform on Mars. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fc356c87f2df,49586CD6A649,If it was created by aliens NASA would've already found out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e3b729bcd0f,49586CD6A649,"There is no real evidence that aliens did it, only in Hollywood movies, and books. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+beec08f4e04b,49586CD6A649,Though some people think otherwise. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+fccf69a5e95d,49586CD6A649,Aliens arn't the reason the Face is on Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e783a0c9a23,49586CD6A649,Nasa has went on three missions to Mars to take pictures. Each time they went there has been no trace of aliens. Also NASA upgraded their camaras each time they went to Mars. So the pictures were more clearer. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f859b86011c,49586CD6A649,"On the second mission NASA went on, the camaras proved it was a natural landform. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b14b57b1c8b,49586CD6A649,Though other scientist belived alien markings were being hidden by wispy clouds. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2bbe02096c03,49586CD6A649,This is because it was winter in Mars during the time NASA went. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f654c911ecf,49586CD6A649,Still NASA went on a third trip to make its point. This time they used their most advanced camera yet and took crystal clear pictures of the Face. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b15fabdd5c5e,49586CD6A649,The pictures reaveled it was a Martian equivalent of a butte. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4de3056f063,49586CD6A649,This is a common landform around the American West. This couldn't be caused by aliens because Mars could've caused this landform to appear. Just like in the American West. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c335719294e,49586CD6A649,Still people think that the alien markings are still there. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+77b8ea4f8835,49586CD6A649,"Overall aliens could'nt of caused this landform. There is no evidence of aliens being on Mars. There is only fiction stories about it, and on radio talk shows. NASA has went on three missions to prove it's a natural landform, and they were'nt able to find alien markings. If this isn't enough evidenve to convince someone they must be a big alien fan. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12011b80568b,49BF71773C4D,We should be changing to the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3096ee0020ce,49BF71773C4D,Everyone should just vote for the vice president and the president. People are voting for the Electoral college while they should be voting to see who will be their new president. The electoral college is getting more votes than the president should be getting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43efb0c057d1,49BF71773C4D,With eletoral college its sometimes hard to chose the president because they are getting tied with the eletoral votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e71f95b914a,49BF71773C4D,One reason some people chose to have the electoral vote is because the president is winning everything. And the electoral college requires a presidental candidate. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+9785911d48b1,49BF71773C4D,To them the president isn't their president. The winner/ the president gets all the awards and receive the most infromation. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a13d26b2c724,49BF71773C4D,Bigger states are getting more attention the all other states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3d2f6de5206,49BF71773C4D,"Some states are not getting any votes at all. Also candidates are getting the same amount of votes, but differnent amount of electoral vote. They want to see who gets the most votes to be the president the most electoral votes. People vote so they can have a perference. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2bd55ef428d8,49BF71773C4D,"In conclusion, we should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The president should be easier to chose and should be chosen equally and fairly.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+186bffb00ff4,49EC678EC9BB,"Most people hear the word ""Electoral College"" and think that it is a place.. But they're wrong, it is a process. The Electoral College is widely regarded as a thing that seems to belong to the past and not to fit in the present. The advocates whom are conflicting with others are saying that the Electoral College method isn't democratic in modern day society, which is correct. The Electoral College is a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens which was founded by the founding fathers. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6c05a2e72d3e,49EC678EC9BB,"The Electoral College has 538 electors, but to elect the President, 270 electoral votes are needed. One for each member in the House of Representives plus two for your Senators is what your state's entitled allotment of electors must equal and the number of members in its Congressional delegation. In the Constitution under the 23rd Amendment, D.C is given 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. ""State"" can also be used instead of using the District of Columbia. Each canidate running for President in each state has his or her own group of electors. The political party is who the electors are generally chosen by but they elect them by giving them different responsibilities. Every four years is when the presidential election is held. I believe that the senator should stick with The Electoral College to vote for the President of the U.S.
+
+When the presidential election is all finished with, the governor prepares something called ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" which lists all of the canidates who ran for office in that particular state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+777649a60a99,49EC678EC9BB,The electoral college system voters vote not only for the president but for what we call the slate electors who eventually elect the president. Not always can voters control whom thier electors vote for and sometimes voters can get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5877dc1f0d48,49EC678EC9BB,"Some people may call the Electoral College outdated, irrational and maybe unfair ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a967d4199842,49EC678EC9BB,"but I think it's a way to keep everything organized and it won't cause to much chaos, unless you disagree with it. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5355558eba42,49EC678EC9BB,"Slate of electors are trusted to vote for the President however, he or she is usually picked by the number of how many votes your electors put in for you. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b3dc6dd33a82,49EC678EC9BB,"Basically, everyone thinks that The Electoral College is just a big waste of time and outdated. But it's a process which elects slate of electors then those who are apart of that will vote for the president. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f477f1c514d,49EC678EC9BB,"In my opinion, I think it's a better way to handle things than to just ask everybody to cast their votes for just one person. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+07525661d708,49ED2C7B57AD,"In this essay, I will be showing how the face on Mars is just a plain everyday landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+318244b54271,49ED2C7B57AD,"In 1976, a picture was taken by the satellite Viking 1. The picture on Mars was found to be what looked like the face of an Egyptian god. The pictures taken were blurry but showed to actually be a face indicating there was life on Mars sometime in the past or even here in the present. NASA kept studying this mask for years to come. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac5a5706d51d,49ED2C7B57AD,"A few years later, another satellite took pictures about 10 times sharper and clearer. But in this picture, the so called mask just looked like a normal everyday landform. The media was not happy with this picture. But this picture did show proof that there was just a landform just like on Earth, that was nothing special. Even one of NASA's global surveyor said that there are landforms on Mars just like on Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0afa8a393ad5,49ED2C7B57AD,"In conclusion, the landform on Mars was just a simple regular crater that looked like a face in a poor quality, blurry picture.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f2c9f4307617,4A12B5FDB00B,"To help the community or to not help the community, it's a question asked by many teenagers of this generation. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0b22d010efee,4A12B5FDB00B,"Though most people would be disgusted by the idea of picking up trash at the beach or helping out at retirement home, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+e038399755bd,4A12B5FDB00B,I think that all kids should do community service to make their lives and the community a better place. ,Position,Effective,,,
+638f55b0d385,4A12B5FDB00B,"For example, most of the movies or television shows people see, it always revolves around doing the right thing and making the right decision, but when the teenagers really come face to face with community service, most of the would be either annoyed or disgusted. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+132023b3d0ef,4A12B5FDB00B,"They would think that doing community service takes too much time away from what they think they ""need"" to do or what they want to do ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c984b73c8734,4A12B5FDB00B,But have they ever thought about what a better community they would live in if they did community service? ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5712407d382b,4A12B5FDB00B,"For instance if you love the beach, don't you just hate it when you just want to lie on the beach and relax or go surfing but always have to be around great number of sea gulls picking at trashes next to you and being pelted bye plastic bags in the waves? If the children of our generation loves the beach so much, they should just pick up the trash they found-or even threw themselves-then everyone can enjoy a happy and clean ecosystem/community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fdca419fc682,4A12B5FDB00B,"Doing community helps everyone, including oneself and the ones around them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+13ec5c32463a,4A12B5FDB00B,"Especially since the children in this generation have been introduced to so many violent and/or inappropriate video games, television shows, and movies-whose only focus is to add excitement and get maximum audiences and money-they are bound to be corrupted, so in doing community service, it can right the wrong of the improper way of life that had been inflicted upon us by the media of today, the same media that would show and/ or sell anything in order to get the maximum audience and make the most money possible and have never thought about the consequences that would have in the future of the United States. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ddfc548f97a,4A12B5FDB00B,"So step by step, we should start shaping the future of this generation and the future of the United States by doing community service!!! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+64b45f60134d,4A19AA269331,i think that we should cape the electoral college process ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ba35e1802798,4A19AA269331,if it is not broken don't fix it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8610faf8ad9,4A19AA269331,Also this process is a part of our founding fathers history it was established to compromise between election of the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7af72454d653,4A19AA269331,"The electoral college has 538 electors but the president needs to have 270 electoral votes to become the president. The 23 amendment of the contitution allows columbia 3 electors and treated like a state for purpose of the electoral college. When you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates electors. Every candidate running for president in your state has his or her own goup of electors. Some states have a winner take all system, which gives all the electors a award to the winning presidential candidate.
+
+After the presidential election the governor prepares a ""certificate of ascertainment"" listing the candidates who ran for president. The certificate of ascertainment declares the winning presidential candidate in my state will represent your state at the meeting of electors ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d623f43a63c4,4A19AA269331,"Abolishing the electoral college no said Bob Dole and Jimmy Carter they agreed. They are not alone according to a Gallup poll in 2000 taken after Al Gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2c7e2cbbb9e9,4A19AA269331,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d7fead4579d,4A19AA269331,There is pressure for running off election when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast that pressure which would complicate the presidential election process is reduced by the electoral college which produces a clear winner. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4821d991b59f,4A5D0595AB31,Do you think that the FACE was created by aliens ? Well i think the face is just a land form but thats how i feel about it ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bb95c10534ac,4A5D0595AB31,I don't believe that aliens are real ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+db816d16c051,4A5D0595AB31,On the other hand you might think they are real and i don't blame you because when i was little i thought they was real to ... by all of the movies i was watching about aliens taking over ect ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a4eac44a3919,4A5D0595AB31,"Although , few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact photographing . ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+1b42e908b403,4A5D0595AB31,"So they photographed the face as soon as they could get a good shot at it . On April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look . When they had did they a pixel in the 2001 image spams 1.56 meters , they image was not a face anymore it was really Martain equivalent of a butte or masa . It reminds me of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" says Garvin. "" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b94cf15d7eb3,4A5D0595AB31,"Finally, now you see that there were no aliens on mars and they aliens are not real . It was just the Martian equivalent of butte or mesa landforms . so now with all this information i just gave you, you should believe me now .      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fb2609b56ee3,4A8B8527DD14,You may think that the face on mars was created by aliens and we say it isn't it's a natural landform sorta like some natural landforms on Earth like the Grand Canyon it's a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b07f9dc09ffd,4A8B8527DD14,we can't actually prve the the face is a landform but we have a spacecraft named Viking 1 and 2 that has taken pictures of it so we can see if it was formed by aliens or if it is just a natural landform. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+505e8b029734,4A8B8527DD14,"Here is how we think that it is a natural landform, as it says in the article ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, se if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!""and it also says ""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West it reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be0066cf02b3,4A8B8527DD14,"Even though we think it is natural landform you guys think that aliens have made it and your point is as it says in the article ""The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+89e557cc60e9,4A8B8527DD14,"So as it says in the article ""It's not easy to target Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips we just don't pass over the face ver often."" 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f6add4fad57,4A8B8527DD14,even though the alien thing has a good point the pictures that Viking 1 and 2 got show that there are no alien markings ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+83e5726bc4e7,4A8B8527DD14,it is probably just a natural landform like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho or the Grand Canyon. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a5d8391e3d4e,4A8FCC8C7D9B,Hello to begin off with im going to say a few opions of my own in which way to agrue in favor of keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ce4f36395f9d,4A8FCC8C7D9B,I would have to go with electral college because better who would want a rich person voting last ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fd02e6ee149f,4A8FCC8C7D9B,hat would not be fair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1eaebef843c5,4A8FCC8C7D9B,"To Start off with is why did i pick this, i pick this because the electoral college is a moving process full of educated students looking to make whats best out of what ever they have. ''the founding fathers established it in the constitution'' that students over 18 can vote ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+345e89e34c97,4A8FCC8C7D9B,the cons of this is their still young a their still growing up I get that ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5ed5da3ae579,4A8FCC8C7D9B,The electoral college process consists many of the selection of the electors like meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president also counting of the electoral votes by congress. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fadf78fe61ca,4A8FCC8C7D9B,"Getting to a close to end now so let me keep giving you infor mation why i pick electoral college instead of popular vote, popular vote in my opionon is in my way letting the poor still be poor ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9830724ae1c7,4ABA61F516D1,"The Electoral College is broken, and with another election on the way, here is why the voting should be changed to popular vote for the president of the United States. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1e7566c08c77,4ABA61F516D1,"Voters cannot control whom their electors are, in the chance that those electors are replaced with new electors so the votes may be rigged ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bf63c0cd74d9,4ABA61F516D1,"""faithless"" electors may refuse to vote for their party's candidate and could cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d14adc8b573a,4ABA61F516D1,"Voters don't actually vote for the president, instead, they vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb3ceca05f84,4ABA61F516D1,"In the case that you vote John Kerry in Texas, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. In the case those electors won the statewide election, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral vote. Who are the electors? They could be anyone, even if their not holding office. Who even picks these electors in the first place? Sometimes it state conventions, other times it's the state's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves. Can we, citziens of the United States, control whom their electors vote for? Not always, and that shouldn't be. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18286964b13e,4ABA61F516D1,"In the 1960 election, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature almost succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy and make it seem that a popular vote would have not gone to Kennedy. What would happen if their was a tie in the electoral vote? The case would be thrown in the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Becasue each state counts for only one vote, a single representative from Wyoming would represent 500,000 voters, 55 representatives from California who getto represent 55 representatives would have as much say as the one from Wyoming. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+975a74407c43,4ABA61F516D1,This cannot represent the will of the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46da0452be1f,4ABA61F516D1,Now when have you changed your mind about something? Electors can do the same. Electors can refuse to vote for their party's candidate and vote for whomever they please ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c5e023c0a027,4ABA61F516D1,"That can't be right, yet it has happened plently of times before. It's even unfair to the people, who sometimes don't even get to see their electors. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, they don't focus of states they know they cannot win, aiming towards ""swing states."" In the 2000 campaign, 17 states didn't see their candidates at all, as well as 25 of the largest media markets who didn't get to see not one campaign ad. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2be9fd6da2b7,4ABA61F516D1,"The Electoral College dosen't hear the voice of the people, hardly plays by the rules, is something that should be erased. Even people like Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dale, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO agree, give the voice back to the people and abolish the Electoral College!    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+612aa1a9d869,4AFC0853D08D,"Reckless drivers are dangers, they have no care for the world or people who are in it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4760d9486dc5,4AFC0853D08D,"One point of evidence is that in 2013, BMW announced the development of the '' Traffic Jam Assistant''. So this means that when you are driving up to 25 mph you have a smart car , but when you go over 25 mph you have just a normal car . See the point that I'm trying to make is that when people had a little bit to much to drink and they go over 25 mph they're like a missle that can blow up at any time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa7d02daf09f,4AFC0853D08D,Some sensors on the car may fail while you are driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e21024e041d0,4AFC0853D08D,"lets say if your driving down the street in a BMW at 20 mph and a car passes you and your not looking and you happen to run into it, its the cars fault and the owner because the driver should've been looking and the car should've stop on the dime. Because BMW developed this new System and its mention in paragraph ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11162bb720af,4AFC0853D08D,"7 '' The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph , but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. Also mention by BMW ''They can steer, accelerate, and brake by themsevles ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88b48abe790f,4AFC0853D08D,"So if the driver in this situation was looking down at a phone lets say ,and runs into the back of someones car who's fault would it have been ? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+766a3719a9b3,4AFC0853D08D,I would have blame the manfacturer company because they said that the car is supose to brake themselves if danger is near or coming up . So if the owner was hurt then it would've been on manufacturer company all because they said that this car had sensors that could alert the drivers. Also which leads to another point lets say that the sensors fail without the driver knowing and she was driving a little bit reckless then that would been her fault and the cars ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc39411a1518,4AFC0853D08D,So I think that people should stop driving so reckless and start paying attention to the road ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c23aa3c81e07,4AFC0853D08D,Also I think that a new law should be passed saying that car companies should recall their cars every 5 to 6 years to upgrade the safety quality on their cars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+079994f54b9f,4AFC0853D08D,This will safe a numerous amout of people's lives and increase the amount of cars being sold by BMW. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f74a4189fcd,4B0CFB5539BA,Policy 1 is a good considering policy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+74a256641307,4B0CFB5539BA,I think we should do that at SCHOOL_NAME because we are not allowed to have cell phones so this is a good way to show the principal that we are responsible ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b8614a4f57a,4B0CFB5539BA,If we use it in class we should get it taken but not from everybody but just for that person who didn't do what she/he was told. I would like this policy in the school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+80e4596a3e98,4B0CFB5539BA,If we get this policy we should be able to show our principal that we are young adults ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f46499f7b6e,4B0CFB5539BA,If we have this policy i am going to be happy cause this a change to show our principal that we can do it without her telling us because we are older to know what's right from wrong. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a869165236f,4B0CFB5539BA,That's a good idea to do because what if something goes wrong and you need your mom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7b0ca9b3ae8,4B0CFB5539BA,you can always call her at lunch if you need her. If u need some advice and you don't want to go to your principal u should be able to call your mom at lunch ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+773c8cb69fbe,4B0CFB5539BA,That's all I have to say ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4d8181695584,4B39C0D759AA,You should consider policy #1 because most kids use their cell phone no matter what the rule is. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f98f0b9bc3d7,4B39C0D759AA,"The kids should deserve the right to use cell phones at school incase they forgot to tell their parents about a minimum day, or want to show their friend a new game that they got. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0753ea6be55,4B39C0D759AA,"In free time there isn't anything to do anyways.
+
+What could go wrong, I mean it's only at lunch and during free time.
+
+What's there to be called free time if you can't do what you want to do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f50d02fdafb,4B39C0D759AA,"I think I speak for all kids when I say we want the right to have a phone. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+058392383ac6,4B4A73217C3A,"The development of driverless cars would be an amazing thing.
+
+So many bad situations could be avoided with driverless cars because the human drving a car is an enormous variable.
+
+The payoff of using driverless cars would be giant as well.
+
+Granted, it would be expensive and the period of time it would take to completely phase out regular cars would be lengthy, it would be a worthwhile investment into the future. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c44a498b9b8a,4B4A73217C3A,The development of driverless cars would be an amazing in incredibly helpful step for society and the car manufacturing world. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f05496da7956,4B4A73217C3A,"Every year hundreds of thousands of people are killed in car accidents.
+
+Many of those accidents are a result of neglegence on the fault of the driver.
+
+Driving while under the influence, driving and texting, driving and making calls, driving and eating, driving and putting make-up on; all are things that cause car accidents that could be avoided with driverless cars. With driverless cars, passengers would be able to go on the road and not have to deal with the stress that comes with driving around on busy roads, or the stress that comes with taking into consideration bad drivers, other people driving under the influence, or just other drivers in general. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6e0c0606f4ee,4B4A73217C3A,Driverless cars would eliminate the biggest variable regarding cars: the driver. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+98af33f1edf7,4B4A73217C3A,"A driverless car would be beneficial to many people, but they would be even more beneficial to the companies and factories that construct and sell the cars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c13146e8d24,4B4A73217C3A,"They would be expensive to buy, but would pay off themselves every time an incident is avoided.
+
+Not to mention, eventually the regular cars would be phased out.
+
+This means that car companies who build and sell the driverless cars would be making a sensational amount of money.
+
+Finding the equptment to build all the driverless cars would be expensive and time consuming, but the process would be worth it to have all the new cars made and on the roads. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4cb83443d7d,4B4A73217C3A,Driverless cars would change the way the world works. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2898b8b55fb2,4B4A73217C3A,"There would be no ""new driver anxiety"" when teens get their liscenses.
+
+There would be a dramatic decrease in the death-by-vehicle statistics.
+
+It would not be suprising if one day people no longer needed to buy cars, similar to the article when Sergey Brian said, ""...such cars would change the world."".
+
+There are so many options that arise when considering such an invention.
+
+What is a city decided to have fleets of taxis and buses with driverless cars?
+
+Driverless cars would be an added benefit.
+
+Then no one would have top buy a car and spend the money to take car of it with upkeep, and car companies would still make a lot of money.
+
+With driverless cars, the impact on the environmet would be very much less than those cars of today.
+
+The options and pros are endless when it comes to driverless cars.
+
+The world would experience a shift in function if driverless cars were introduced.
+
+The number of deaths and accidents involving automotives would decrease exponetially and life would be a little less stressful for many.
+
+The attack on the environment would be lessened, and roads would be safer. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ee73740c3ed9,4B4A73217C3A,"There are pros and cons for any situation, but in the case of driverless cars, the pros seem to greatly outweigh the cons.
+
+The quality of life would increase, and the variable of the human driver would be eliminated. Driverless cars would be an excellent addition to the car lots and would be an amazing tool for people in everyday life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+886e35a1d0be,4B6343C4BF5B,I think we should in take concideration in the next few years about changing are election to popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+82de4bb47888,4B6343C4BF5B,I feel that are state would benefit in a positive way with the way that popular vote is set up. looking at the  past history the electoral college is not benefiting us in a positive direction. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e262cf6efa26,4B6343C4BF5B,"i qutoe this from the article ""over 60 percent of voters would pefer a direct election"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4271a98e67e,4B6343C4BF5B,with that being said lets look at the cons of the electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f2ce5c46aa6,4B6343C4BF5B,To begin with the electoral college system the people like me dont get to vote for president i have to vote for someone else to vote for me in that i feel like my vote doesnt count ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f6ff4978582,4B6343C4BF5B,because what happens if i vote for a elector and he doesnt go for my person to win. That just makes me feel dumb then if the elector does vote for the same person asme its not really even final becuase that vote doesnt go towards the president it goes toward the state elector and its basically there choice. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c4ac585538c,4B6343C4BF5B,another con in the electoral college system is that the same fiasco in 2000 will break out again. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+821c0fc34ce0,4B6343C4BF5B,were the legislatures are responsible for picking electors and they dont take in to concideration of other people votes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6d5ef92a841,4B6343C4BF5B,the con that could mostly impact america is a tie in the electoral vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+509ba8c7533d,4B6343C4BF5B,"another reason the electoral college is an stupid way to vote is that the big states get better privelges than the smaller states they out rule the smaller states. Its final the electoral college is unfair outdatedand irrational. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cdb6e59a948,4B6343C4BF5B,"the only reasons the electoral college is alive now is the cetainty outcome,everystates president,swing states,runoff elections .run off electionsn means basically  there will never be a blow out in the voting polls it will always be compitive ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1a327f9fd721,4B6343C4BF5B,with that being said with the presidents trying to run for president the will actually try to reach the peoples needs to meet there satisfactory. the swing states is sayiong that there one state isnt going to decide the whole election.                    ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+98bbc33edc13,4B6A52E23DE9,"The electrol college system is an unfair system, people don't have the right to select their own president, they dont have the right to select a president. ",Position,Effective,,,
+15a078a0d976,4B6A52E23DE9,"Because, when people vote they are technically voting for the electors for a candited. That candidate can be a democratic or a republican. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a886bba95544,4B6A52E23DE9,In source two it states that electors can choose there opposing candidate. Which declines the the whole voting process. Why do we vote? we vote to select a leader who will defend this coutry and make america a place of oppurtunity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ed6210c63789,4B6A52E23DE9,"The most important reason why the electrol cllege is unfair because of the "" winners it take all"" rule. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4c90e9663b73,4B6A52E23DE9,"Each state gets one vote and then the electors can choose who they want for president. In source two it states that the electoral college consists of 538 electors and the most amont of elecrtoral votes is 270, in order to pick an president. Also in source two it states that the number of electors we have equals to the amount of members of congress we have. I propose a new system by only letting the American people select our president by votes counted all up by each state, for example if we didn't have have electoral college,  then it would be a fair vote because people votes would count the number that adds up with all votes for one candidates that will oppose another candidates and there would be technically no tie it would either ,more or less, but if we still had the electoral college then the vote would not be equally fair becuse if the majority of a state for examlpe  chose republican candidate, then that would be vague becuse some people choose democratic and there vote did not really count. but without the electoral collge, than everyones vote counts and each candidates gets vote from every one, not only electoral. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fadcc18d3e2c,4B6A52E23DE9,"for example if one state candidate was choosen for republican and they were ""faithless"" as it says in source two, and chose the democratic party it would be very unfortunate for the republicans because than there would be no point of the votes the republican supporters have voted for. It only comes once every four years, this is very important to the american people, on choosing who they want for the future of america. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d67a2cf7c64a,4B6A52E23DE9,"Because the people really didnt mean to vote for the candidate they don't want or the candidate they dont support, its like your money fell on the floor and someone just took it knowing its yours. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6fbe11b7544,4B6A52E23DE9,"In conclusion,  the state senators should eliminate the electoral collge because they count the majorty votes, and don't count other votes that is not popular as the other candidates vote. also because they can decide vote on an canditate they want based on their opinions and beliefs. and lastly because of the winner takes it all system which is bascially taking the losing candidates electoral votes.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6566a38927e9,4BA61396D272,I thinkl that you should keep electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b3d9cbf7199a,4BA61396D272,qualified citizens chose it obvisliy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83670ea8cf75,4BA61396D272,you should have it's a easy compromise to vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+073e7050e153,4BA61396D272,It helps you choose your state's electors when you vote for president because you are actullay voting for your candidates electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27ba79941ba0,4BA61396D272,"Under the system of electoral college voters vote not for presdint ,but for a slate of electors instead. It could help us undersatnd voting for our electors if you keep electoral voting. Even though some say that this was the 2000 fisaco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The system could of had worse. I think it helps with voting more than anything else instead of the online voting for the slate electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0cdee1476076,4BA61396D272,"Some also so it should be abloished and that it's unfair and very irrantional, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8f1af9dece5f,4BA61396D272,it has helped more than do any damage to any other type of voting like that tabs we once used to vote for everything. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b1d7270cd889,4BA61396D272,"We should keep it because of its certanity of outcome because it helps when there is a tie on voting. ""Swing States"" are anthor reason because of the winner takes all method we sawin 2012's election to focus their campaign efforts on the  toss up states ,it help us out because at the end of paragraph 20 it says the most thoughful voters should be the ones to decide the election with electoral college.  It does also big states electoral college restores some of the weigth in the political balance that large states lose by virtue. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ffcf2914b9d5,4BA61396D272,It does also help with run-off elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11e9fac8af89,4BA61396D272,it helps avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. It says that it may turn off voters for a candidate who has no hopes of carrrying their state. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f339a5055c41,4BA61396D272,Those are my reasons why you shouldn't  get rid of electoral voting ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+38bf4d2772e3,4BB2F265CFEB,Let the people vote for the person they want to not the electoral collage. I agree that the electoral collage should be change. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+96fd7b74f4d3,4BB2F265CFEB,"This is because some people vote for a president that they are not voting for. People wish that the person that they are voting should be president. Yes we should follow the constitutuion but something we should not follow at all. On paragragh 10 it says that when you vote you don't vote for the president you vote for the slate of electors. Then they pick who should be the president. People have the chance to vote for who should be the president. For,example, when something happen in 2000 gore and bush. Gore had the upper hand and was going to will but then instead of gore winning bush on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e216632da11,4BB2F265CFEB,"
+The electoral collage is good but not that good. The electoral collage has to choose the president and the vice president. That is not right ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c459133395ba,4BB2F265CFEB,"many people thought that the U.S is doing the right thing but they are not. During this time in 2000 campaign,17 states did not see the candinates at all. if anyone has a good arguement for putting the fate of predsidencey in the hand of a few swing vater in ohio they have not taken there move yet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5412cf039b0,4BB2F265CFEB,"the electoral collage is unfair, outdated, and irrational. the best argument in fovor of it are mostly assertion without much basis. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+57a225fc23c1,4BB2F265CFEB,"mr. ob dole was right that we should abolish the electoral collage. i beleive and it my oppion that this is not right but the candinates think so. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d3270ff13bc,4BB2F265CFEB,"
+Like On paragragh 18 the same thing happen with obama and romney to . obama received 61.7% for the elector vote compared to only51.3%.so the electoral collage should not be a constitution ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13a39d945ed7,4BB2F265CFEB,because that if we let it keep on going then is will not be fair to anyone at all. And it also not fair for a winner tom take all.            ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+08807c9f87a1,4BB5ADD5A1FE,I know befor you were senator you voted just like us and you know how frustrating it can be somethings. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9255b82809f9,4BB5ADD5A1FE,The Electoral Collage sould be discarted and Presidents of the united states should be elected by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+37bdc0081299,4BB5ADD5A1FE,If we do the popular vote it will be more efficent and be easier to keep track of. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f89ff0784275,4BB5ADD5A1FE,We have to do it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+101d9d7dbeba,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"The Electoral collage it's failed to elect a President , ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6bc33733adf,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"the masses (the people) don't get to pick the president, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e1901cfda88,4BB5ADD5A1FE,its outdated. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cdc8b824563,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"Firstly, we need to abolish the electoral collage because it has failed to elect a President in the past. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+98444044ffb9,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"In the case of a tie in electoral votes it would be the task of the house of representatives the elect a president and the way they elect the presidnt is worse then the electoral collage. even thought and exact tie in the predidental elections has not occored so the catostrify of the house of representatives electing the presisdent has not happen yet ,but it is entirly  possible. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f9a821fb4e5,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"Secondly, we need to abolissh the Electoral collage because the masses (the people) don't get to the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24f0f4cd8f5f,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"In the  electoral collage usage of the system resalts in the
+
+People electing the electors ,to elect the president. And in this system the eletors can pull a switcharoo and vote for the other canadent if they so please, to betray the people by doing so. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dfea8bb09d6d,4BB5ADD5A1FE,allthought its system has worked scince the founding of our country ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+81cd83364309,4BB5ADD5A1FE,it is still quirky and disfunctionable at times. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1362978dbebe,4BB5ADD5A1FE,the electoral collage allows the electors to do as they please if a elector for florida promises to pick one president and gets all the votes to got to the electoral collage he can choose the Other canadent because his freind wanted him to ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ffc0d395f9a,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"Thirdly, we need to abloish the electoral collage because it is outdated. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f12e261e029e,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"in our day and time we have smart phones and aindroids that we can use to vote for the president in the peoples choice. there could be a web site that you can go on to submit your election and at the end of the election the compuster can tally us the number of votes to the exact amount so it would be the peoples choice. its  also outdated becouse we dont need one or a few guys to be sent somewhere to cast the vote of the people , we have so mmusch advanced technology that we can have any legal person who wants to vote can and actually have there vote matter insted of what the elector pick so it matters to those few poeple instead of every single person in america. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+572375683d93,4BB5ADD5A1FE,"In conclusion, we need to abolish the electoral collage because it can fail to elect a president(which is almost did in 1960), the masses (the people) can't elect the president(they have to elect the electers to elect the president, and also is is very outdated. in my opion, we should also consiter tweking the electoral callage instead of just getting rid of it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d7cf2b3fb4a,4BD93FED6367,"A Face on Mars, or just a common mesa? Many skeptics belive that the mesa on Mars, located at 41 degrees north martian latitude, is proof of ancient alien civilazation. In 1976, when NASA's Viking 1 crossed over a landform that showed ""shadowy likeness"" of a human face. When NASA revealed the picture to the public, thinking it would be a good way to draw attention to Mars, caused an uproar. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5199ba74bcea,4BD93FED6367,"A few years later, Micheal Malin and his team took a picture 10x sharper than that of the Viking 1 spacecraft. When the photo first appeared online, it showed nothing but a common mesa that can be found in the American west. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74d284bf74c0,4BD93FED6367,"Again skepics were not satisfied, the picture was taken on a cloudy day over Mars. So they began to ask questions like; What if the alein markings were hidden by haze? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0665e80899ab,4BD93FED6367,"So again, on a perfectly clear day, another photo was taken April 8th, 2001. They used the camera's ""absolute maximum resolution."" Yet again, showing nothing but a common landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fa9f1457f4a,4BD93FED6367,Well what if NASA is hiding evidence of ancient alein life on Mars? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2f67825f5095,4BD93FED6367,"Why would NASA hide groundbreaking news like this? ""Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was anceint civilazation on Mars.""
+
+So why would NASA hide news like this, that would help advance space exploration? ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+01e630001193,4BD93FED6367,"What else could it be, all evidence points to nothing except a common mesa. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d5a7a7d5771b,4BD9A9FE0FA4,"I think you should let us students that have a
+
+D
+
+should play sports. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+9150ff5ffbae,4BD9A9FE0FA4,"I think you not let kids with a F
+
+should not play because then need to have higher than a F in the grade book ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc3840ee40eb,4BD9A9FE0FA4,I think we should have more activities so everyone would come to school everyday ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8288e0e0c49c,4BD9A9FE0FA4,i don't know u might have a lot of new students if some things change . Everyone might listen or they will not listen at all we might get sent to the principals office. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f4dee7abeba,4BD9A9FE0FA4,You the principal should think about this we should have more students play sports. and also have free time . But if we have torturing we should have it for students that want help and that . Like if we had a activity to go on a fill trip we should go to one . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+caee615d4f95,4BDCA46AC00E,I disagree with student having to have a grade B average to be able to participate in school activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d299fd5e4c8a,4BDCA46AC00E,it's not so easy for some kids to keep their grades up when they also have school activities ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ad44f40ed71,4BDCA46AC00E,"making this new rule would be taking a lot of fun opportunities from students that have trouble with school work. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f9cb182e54b,4BDCA46AC00E,",I disagree because it's not easy for some kids to keep their grades up when they also have school activities ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7ebed3389fe,4BDCA46AC00E,Students are going to be put under a lot of pressure if they have to keep up with school work and take school activities which could cause stress. Also students sometimes won't be able to keep up with all the work and activities after school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+12971f40f525,4BDCA46AC00E,making this new rule would be taking a lot of fun opportunities from students that have trouble with school work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9e92fa07d50,4BDCA46AC00E,Students could have scholarships from playing basket ball and football which are school activities and could make them successful in life but if they have to still get a grade B average then this makes it harder for them to achieve. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+652ae6f74d54,4BDCA46AC00E,Students don't deserve to be put under pressure like that because its bad for their health. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6675060a6b73,4BDCA46AC00E,I disagree with students having to have a grade B average to be able to participate in school activities because it's not easy for some kids to keep their grades up when they also have school activities and making this new rule would be taking a lot of ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d1d3184eae42,4C1B24495AB7,Its not a alien its just how the landform was growing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f3bc58e4ae2c,4C1B24495AB7,It started growing in a weired way and it kept going. Its just a landform there are many landforms on mars but this one is a little different from the rest of the landform ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1eaee4224f74,4C1B24495AB7,this one looks more like like a face and the rest are just plane landforms ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd1fe496095c,4C1B24495AB7,But if there was aliens On mare why would they just make one landform that looks like a face if there was aliens on mars im sure they wouldnt just make one that looks like a face and dont make anymore. They would make more and more till they got tired of making them ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+01c33afa6e9c,4C1B24495AB7,But its a landform growing in a shape of a face if there was different landforms that grew the same way it would be the same way as this landform. Or there coud have bind so bad weather and it could have did this and made the face. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5d8162a2300d,4C543C424527,I think that driverless cars sound pretty cool. People don't need driverless cars though. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4db463e68add,4C543C424527,"When driverless cars are made, people might start texting while the car is driving thinking they're still safe when they could still be in danger ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c20c0eac2761,4C543C424527,"Driverless cars is a good and bad idea, its cool but it could still be dangerous. I think they should not make driverless cars because we don't need them when we can drive on our own. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2e78f3643727,4C543C424527,Since it is computer what if hackers hijacked it? Or maybe it messed up because its computer made and the driver has no control? ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b62a3a188d96,4C543C424527,"There are many things that could possibly happen since its ""computer driven"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e23c909c00da,4C543C424527,"There was something on the news before about people hijacking cars and other things, think about how easy it could be to get control of a computer driven vehicle, it would probably be more easy. If they are gonna bring them I think they should add security or something, maybe do a whole bunch of tests with devices to make sure that it's safe. This vehicle doesn't just put the driver in danger, but it also can put other peoples life in danger. If a person crashed into another person they could die. I know for sure that when I get older and start driving, I probably wont get a driverless car if they come out because in my opinion I think that these sound pretty dangerous and I don't wanna get hurt or something to happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e33251496df4,4C543C424527,This actually probably could help people who are hurt/injured who can't drive get to places possibly ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2f69d0356611,4C543C424527,So I think maybe they could add them aslong as they make sure its as safe as possible. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+edb769165a70,4CA37D113612,"Have you ever wondered what the electoral college is? If you answered no I would say me to, but in this essay im going to explain why i am for it. I havent heard of the electoral college till now. So sit back and read this. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e57a5bacdcf7,4CA37D113612,"I think that we should do the electoral college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1d019f489831,4CA37D113612,so everyone has a say on who they want to be the state senate ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8df94d2bc27,4CA37D113612,"Under the college system,  voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0df77aa54d16,4CA37D113612,"While others might say no we need to get rid of the electoral college, because the senate might be bribing the voters, so he knows that he/she has their vote for sure.
+
+This is where it gets tricky. Alot of people might disagree with you because you have a different point of view than them, but it is ok if you disagree with them, because its your vote that counts. This might be what they say ""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"". The biggest arguments are, because people say that one of the runners in the campaign did something they wasn't suppose to do.
+
+At the most basic level, The elctoral college is unfair to voters. That is probaly something you would say if you was against the electoral college. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+521a2604ea6b,4CA37D113612,It's ok to go for what you believe in. You might get judged but who cares it's your opinion don't listen to them. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7dc8f304d56d,4CA37D113612,I personally think that we should keep it. The Electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00b2ef4b8ce1,4CA37D113612,It's the electors that elect the president not the people. When your voting for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8a124f646664,4CA37D113612,it's nearly impossible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6074a776458,4CA37D113612,"Believe it or not its has happened very rarely. It happened in 2000, when Gore had more votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that's the first time since 1988. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cda3d48a50c,4CA37D113612,"It may have ripped some people off, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+cabf41b82d39,4CA37D113612,"but at least we got people as good presidents. You may not like them, but they have helped us over the years that we were in debt and need. Like right now the president's wife is helping the obese kids at school by putting in whole grains and healthier foods. Those are good reasons, but not as good as these. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3cd549561cea,4CA37D113612,Certainty of out come. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a18bccec37fc,4CA37D113612,"The reason is that winning candidate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds more than enough. Because almost all the states award electoral votes on a winner take all basis, even a vey slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible. But the stakes are highly unlikely to happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11ac34d86391,4CA37D113612,Everyone's President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6f813aa1366,4CA37D113612,"The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. There is region that has enough electoral votes to elect a president. some people has no incentive to campaign heavily in the states that they are regionally favorited, becuse they will not gain any electoral votes by increasing their plurality. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5256e9c675c,4CA37D113612,Swing States ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+015998fc6d0f,4CA37D113612,The winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. Voters in the toss up states are more likely to pay more attention to the campaign. So they know that they are going to know that they are deciding the election. They are also likely to be the most thoughtful voters. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35bf70c4a673,4CA37D113612,Big States ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b919085424b,4CA37D113612,The elctoral college restores somke of the weight in the political balance that large sates lose by virtue of the mal-appointment of the senate decreed in the constitution. The most popular vote in 2012 was by the state of Florida. Obama won that election with only 29 electoral votes. Bigger states get more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a smaller state does. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ddc58b0a4f06,4CA37D113612,Avoid Run Off Elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a9dd922d592,4CA37D113612,"The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which the candidate recieves a majority of the votes by the cast. When neither of the candidates recieve majority vote it becomes more intense, because they start trying their hardest so they can win the election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6cb352e3f01,4CA37D113612,"It can be argued but only one will be victorious. Will we keep the electoral vote? Or will we get rid of it? So if i persuaded you to keep it pick, then keep if i didnt, then pick get rid of it. Which one will you choose. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a3a14fbb611f,4CA50E2333F2,"I understand your reasoning for the new change you would like to undertake, but I am against his issue. Many students in our school love to play sports, and other fun activities, but also many students are getting C averages or below as their grades ",Position,Effective,,,
+2908666b4eaf,4CA50E2333F2,"Kids that are doing so for example should not be restricted from school activities like so just because of their grades, the should be helped. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b3ce573bf475,4CA50E2333F2,"A possible solution is requiring the child stay after school for extra help with teachers, or if that is not possible, encourage small help sessions in class. A child may not be the brightest in school, but may be the best on the basketball team. It is not fair to them to take away something that is amusing for them, or lets them have fun. Their struggling with school isn't going to change if you just take away more privileges. The child needs help. And what i believe may happen is sometimes the child will even start doing worse, or stop focusing as much because he/she is angry and sad they have no privileges other than to focus on their school work more and try harder ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ebfade997f98,4CA50E2333F2,"Most of these reasons are to occur if you take these activities away from children with averages of a C or less. On the other hand, if you start having after school sessions, then the child will start to succeed, and will be having fun participating in their activities. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+39f21de16d5b,4D160DA89EB9,I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c5bc4294d0b9,4D160DA89EB9,"the Electoral College is process consists of the selection of the electors ,which the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President , and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+600b25f2e30d,4D160DA89EB9,"They get to vote who is going to be but, the Electoral College is consists of the selection of five hundred thirty eight electors. The majority of two hundred seventhy electoral votes is requied to elect the president ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28f06c41abc8,4D160DA89EB9,"I think that is not going to be alot of votes of people who is voting for the person who they want. Is just voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Not always the voters can control whom their electors vote for! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b79f424e014,4D160DA89EB9,The argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cf0438498b5d,4D160DA89EB9,"The American people should consider themselves lucky, because the two thousand fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. They was lucky that happen , consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Perhaps the most worrying thin is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+129e07c78b7d,4D160DA89EB9,"The electoral college is unfair,outdated, and irrational. The arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality, and the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. There's five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president and those five reasons is certainty of outcome, everyone's president, swing states, big states, and avoid run-off elections. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99a72104ff0c,4D160DA89EB9,"These five reasons have something to deal with Electoral College. Is just some arguments that they have of electoral college, in of defense of the electoral college. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+278be11aa330,4D160DA89EB9,"Is just asking if the electoral college works? I think that it doesn't because they have arguments about it ,about they dont get that much votes. And that something is wrong with the electoral college. People should decide on what they want and that voters can control whom their electors vote! It can be a argued that the electoral college method of selecting the presisdent may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying thier state. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+75ebd0f93c5a,4D4A979B1FB3,Driverless cars have a positive and negative aspect to them. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+7c02d444d10f,4D4A979B1FB3,Driverless cars have the ability to help a driver when coming too close to a car which is called a sensor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c43120fb4f46,4D4A979B1FB3,Sensor help drivers know when their to close to a car or any object that may put your life in danger. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18d89870ec1b,4D4A979B1FB3,"Another positive thing about driverless cars is that keep improving for example in paragraph 7 the 2013 BMW announced a system called ""Traffic Jam Assistants."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+868139285b5a,4D4A979B1FB3,"Traffic Jam Assistants allows the car to handle driving functions like accelerate,steer,and brake by themselves. It allows the driver to know what they need to do to be in a safe postion. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccb4857d8066,4D4A979B1FB3,"Driverless cars can make you think about the ""What Ifs,"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c57d8766c22,4D4A979B1FB3,like what if something goes wrong with the technology and it puts your life in danger or others. Who fault is its yours or the cars? Driverless cars have negative aspects to them too because their not truly driverless as said in paragraph 2. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d8090e9348ba,4D4A979B1FB3,Driverless cars may seem like their great but they have disadvantges that you should consider for not only your safety but for others to. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+174fe6ba4c12,4D51DD14B0E4,"Phones are a huge part of our children's lives.
+
+In your first policy you state that you could,
+
+""Allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time.""
+
+In your second policy you state that you, "" Do not allow students to have phones at school at all."" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f23eef6f2cc7,4D51DD14B0E4,In my opinion policy number one is the best decision that you could make regarding the students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2694381693b3,4D51DD14B0E4,"The reason i say this is because by letting them have there phones, even at a potion of time, you would not have them sneaking them around as often. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b14a1401d1f3,4D51DD14B0E4,"
+Your letting them have some freedom when it comes to communication, but at the same time you have control over them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8049c728bf87,4D51DD14B0E4,If you chose the second policy you would have a lot of angry parents at your door. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d163c3f93028,4D51DD14B0E4,"Parents and children need to communicate, and they do this, most often than not, on there phones.
+
+If you took away the only way parents could communicate and talk to their children, all these parents would be upset, and of course worried.
+
+For you see, they would not know if there children were home or gone off to friends house, and they couldn't just call them up and ask because there phones would be with them, but at home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d868ec11b1b9,4D51DD14B0E4,"So, please take into consideration what I've said to you. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b41e4b9a2281,4D55C9731228,"The Electoral College is not what it used to be, its not the most effecent way anymore. The people should decide this time, I am not saying get rid of it. But we should change it. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+2985ed83db91,4D55C9731228,There are many people who agree with me ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c0b00dbf6a15,4D55C9731228,"Over sixty percent of the vters would like a more direct system of voteing (according to a Gallup poll in 2000). And so did Ritchard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, The U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and AFL-CIO. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d3b2cba210ab,4D55C9731228,The main reason why people want a change is for all the qurks in the Electoral College system. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a5b23ddf7477,4D55C9731228,"For example, if you lived in Texas. And you wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electoers. Witch in most cases would be O.K., but they could betray the party and vote for whom they please. It doesn't always happen but the possibility is real.  And people, like the segregationists back in 1960, could have gone agenst their party and pick electors to go agenst Kennedy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1376724a6576,4D55C9731228,"All we want is a change, it deosn't have to rewrite the Constitision. But the Electoral College must go. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+81004cf0bd31,4D772EDF3C34,Dear Senator I am not in favor of keeping the Electoral College. We should not keep the Electoral College for many reasons. ,Position,Effective,,,
+18d9e09515b8,4D772EDF3C34,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agreed on one thing, and it was abolishing the Electoral College. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5cb0b5a767e2,4D772EDF3C34,"Another reason being, under the Electoral College System, voters vote for a slate of electors, not the president and in return they select the president ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a2d544205a78,4D772EDF3C34,"Last but not least, the Electoral College is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+576ca8ccdb23,4D772EDF3C34,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agreed on one thing, and it was aboloshing the Electoral College. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2bdcea0676a9,4D772EDF3C34,"This was also agreed upon by many other citizens. According to a Gallup Poll in 2000, which was taken shortly after Al Gore won the popular vote, but lost the popular vote. According to the poll ""over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election not  the kind we have now."" It is said that ""this year voters are to expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again loose the presidency."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a9127f2726c,4D772EDF3C34,"Under the Electoral College System, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in return elect the president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb2741e0e1c4,4D772EDF3C34,"Because of this there are so many questions asked that are answered very broadly due to the fact you do not really know the correct answer. For instace, who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding the public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, Sometimes the  State Party's central comittee, and sometimes the presidential canidates themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+071b5ca9b53b,4D772EDF3C34,"Man oh man is the Electoral College unfair to voters! This may be an opinion, but it is on of many citizens who are all in agreement of it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+15592aaf74bc,4D772EDF3C34,"All of the ""winner-takes-all"" systems in each state, canidates do not spend time in each states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states."" In fact in the 2000 campaing there were seventeen states the did not see the canidates at all and it was said that voters in 25 of the largest media markets did not even get to see a single campaign ad. "" if anyone has a good arguement for putting he fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in ohio, they have yet to make it...."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2080c4939e6b,4D772EDF3C34,"As you can see I am in favor of changing the elctoral college to election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America. Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agreed on one thing, and it was aboloshing the Electoral College. Under the Electoral College System they vote not for the president but for a state of electors who in return elect the president. Last but not least, the Electoral College is just unfair in so many differnt ways. These are reasons why I am not in favor of the Electoral College but in the favor to elect by popular vote for the president of the United States of America.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e7c30293c66a,4E0C8B6B069B,you should stick with the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d61d70a245ca,4E0C8B6B069B,"because i don't really care about any of this. But you wanted my opinion so i gave it to you. Also I say to stick with the electoral college is because i don't care enough to give a reason to change your voting to popular vote. I don't really knoe anything about the ellectoral college or populare vot, because you passage is to boring i couldn't get through half of it. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9210a36c079e,4E0C8B6B069B,Ooh and if whoever is reading this or if your grading this be remind ed if this was getermining if I were to get out of entsive reading or not for next year i really wouyld try harder. Because we both know this isn't. And im cencerly sorry i havent prepared a better passage for you to read. But im pretty sure you don't read all of it. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fff3200e271d,4E1F37A9728A,The face on Mars is just a landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ae337e5503ba,4E1F37A9728A,"There is no such thing as aliens. Alson there is no life of any type that can live on Mars. ""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e80d1ca283c8,4E1F37A9728A,The picture shows us a part of Mars where the face is just form in that weird way ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+83f03972a025,4E1F37A9728A,"Makin people think there was aliens on Mars. Mars is not a liveable place. There is no air to breathe, and it is to hot. You wouldn't make it alive in Mars, because you would lose your breath and burn up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fccc740278c6,4E1F37A9728A,All the picture is show us is that a natural landform has formed on Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c70e71a40c1,4E1F37A9728A,"It is a great picture off landform you might never see again, but it has nothing to do with aliens on Mars. If aliens were real, one of
+
+NASA'S scientists would have found them in outer space by now ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6b93985c3ac,4E1F37A9728A,The face is just a great form of natural landform. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+513c6c5fc04a,4E48D58E859A,I do not think you should make it mandatory for everyone to do community service for a few reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c9e267a68fb1,4E48D58E859A,The first is because you shouldn't make someone do something they really don't want to do even if you think it is good for them because you are not there parent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35c1f80c18dc,4E48D58E859A,"Another reason is because if you make people do community service they will do the bare minimum of work that they are suppose to do or teach a child how to do math wrong, or read words a different way then everyone else. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db81645eaf33,4E48D58E859A,"If they are cleaning up trash i doubt they would do all the work they're suppose to. I bet they might only pick up a couple pieces of trash, and complain about it the whole time ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1bdf46a9286,4E48D58E859A,. I understand it might help the community a little ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8a5c7472c2eb,4E48D58E859A,ut if they do no work or teach a child who's learning to read the wrong way it will take so much more work to help fix what that person has done. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+819cf375d73e,4E48D58E859A,"I get that your trying to help, but all i think it will do is make things much worse for the school and the community ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a94293b57228,4E48D58E859A,I also think that you should make as much school time as you have to do actual school work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+898796e26da7,4E48D58E859A,You could open up another band class or give us study hall sense we don't have it or maybe make home base even longer. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a0f202c96ba,4E48D58E859A,"Find another way to help students and the community. There are a lot of things you can do to help. Just don't force people to do community work. Its just going to make things so much worse, ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+40d4224b5f2c,4E4FAB530872,I agree with policy 1 because student should get to bring their cell phones to school. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3007ea56dbf2,4E4FAB530872,"students might need to have them for family emergencies, students might need them for contacting there parents to transport them home from after school activities, students can use the calculator on there phones for math, students can take pictures with there friends, students might need to use the internet, and students can text other students to see what's up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c60dee269e42,4E4FAB530872,All of these reasons can help students have a better and much easier life personally and educationally. If students weren't allowed to bring them at all there lives would be so much harder. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+07a723e16af4,4E4FAB530872,Students could also listen to music with there cell phones. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+809f8f62061a,4E4FAB530872,Music helps relieve stress and calm peoples nerves. It also helps people relax. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9344e1a1079f,4E4FAB530872,The only thing bad is students could bring them to class and secretly text or some other thing and it could possibly bring there grades down ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9bdd13bf22a8,4E4FAB530872,But teachers get to bring there cell phones to school and use them anytime they want so why shouldn't students? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+782fc1b12ba3,4E4FAB530872,Students should have the same rights as teachers or any adults. The constitution says that all people are created equal. That should give students the right to bring cell phones to school ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00089291ece1,4E4FAB530872,Well that's all I got to say so thank you for your time on reading this letter. Please put these thoughts into consideration. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7610e029a599,4E8255A83429,The school should go with policy 1. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea0f01c97506,4E8255A83429,"I think this because some students need to contact their parents right after school. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e490411402bf,4E8255A83429,I also think that students should be allowed to use phone in lunch periods and free time because its another way of being social and kids need to be social. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+078df52c8960,4E8255A83429,What if they need a for or something important they could call their parents and ask their parents to bring it to school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce3ef3c545e6,4E8255A83429,Another reason I think students should be allowed to bring phones to school is if something happens to the school and the school is not able to contact the students parents the students themselves could contact their parents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d94927521de,4E8255A83429,"
+If the school went with policy two most students would still bring their phones. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d207cc5b11d,4E8255A83429,"Although I agree with policy one there are some risks to bringing your phone to school. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f57df474ffd8,4E8255A83429,"Your phone could get stolen.
+
+You could get it confiscated.
+
+If phones get stolen there will be accusations and there will be some students who would fight because of those accusations.
+
+There could be more fights and stolen properties and parents would get upset and they could press charges to the school or the person who stole the phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a19c75e964e2,4E8255A83429,"Another reason policy two could be better is because most rumors start of as a text or something someone posts on like facebook. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+24f21f5d6b2c,4E8255A83429,"Policy two could stop some rumors.
+
+It would not stop all the rumors because rumors can be started outside of school where students would have access to their phones. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb77487bbe91,4E8255A83429,"These are the good and bad things about policy one.
+
+This is why I have chosen policy one. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9516c9f4c1af,4E83F1166BA9,The Electoral College is an outdated system of voting. There are few weak reasons why it should be carried out as the nations voting process. The United States of America should change to election by popular vote for the presidency. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6c842fe35a39,4E83F1166BA9,"Admmitedely, the winner take all system is a fair way of deviding the votes. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+835fd3be307a,4E83F1166BA9,"In the first article ""What Is the Electoral College?"" by the Office of the Federal Register, the author asserts, ""Most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all the electors to the winning presidential candidate."" If a presidential candidate spends alot of time, effort, and money in a campaign for a ""swing"" state; he should be awarded all the votes for winning that state. It is a high risk but high reward to spend all that time and money to only earn sixty percent of the votes. That is why a ""winner-take-all"" is crucial. To add on, the author of the first article mentions, ""Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are..."" This is saying that a candidate chooses his or her electors, and you vote for the electors to then choose the candidate you voted for ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b42a6331d97f,4E83F1166BA9,"However; the people should have the right to directly choose the candidate of his or her choice. Therefore, the elecoral college is outdated and must be eliminated. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ae2af5c8b1f2,4E83F1166BA9,"To start off, Bradford Plumer the author of ""The indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" states, ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+12853c47987a,4E83F1166BA9,Every vote counts. But why make a vote more powerful than another. Citizens shouldn't be given a special vote just because they were chosen by the candidates party. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+01b35d1c51ca,4E83F1166BA9,"Additionally, Plumer explains, ""If you lived in texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry."" Why should kerry earn 34 electoral votes. He should earn the amount of voters in that state he persuaded to vote for him. He should not earn the electoral votes of all the people that did not think he was the best presidential candidate. Every vote should count, and that is why the electoral college should be eliminated. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d29cc9c34cd0,4E83F1166BA9,"Secondly, Plumer claims ""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. (The senate would choose the vice-president.) Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represnt 35million voters."" This method is rediculous. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+620534efec21,4E83F1166BA9,A state with one representative should not have the equal amount of power as a state with 55. If popular vote is made the way of electing then the odds of a tie would be nearly impossible. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fff7032df6fd,4E83F1166BA9,"Also Plumer adds, ""Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency."" This means more people thought he was better suited to be the President of the United States, but Bush won because of the ""quirks"" of the electoral college. All in all, the electoral college is unfair, and creates more problems then popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+94591118ac8c,4E83F1166BA9,"The United States of america should change from the electoral college to popular vote. The outcome would be better for the country, and fairer to the candidates. That is why the electoral college should be eliminated.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+dc72fe426e2d,4EB6E7B8DEC0,"I a citizen of the United States Of America would like to voice my opinion, on behalf of the Electoral college ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+86da8742eea3,4EB6E7B8DEC0,I think the Electoral college shall stay put. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4c45c160b1b8,4EB6E7B8DEC0,A while back the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of quallified citizens. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e2910f1b282a,4EB6E7B8DEC0,which means the tradition have lasted for decades and it shall not end now it shall remain forever. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07ee50654dbf,4EB6E7B8DEC0,If there is no more Electoral college it would not be fair because we would not be able to vote for the president we desire. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+759ae621ed69,4EB6E7B8DEC0,"Who knows who will become the president then! Not only will we not be able to vote for the president of the United States of America but we wont be able to vote for the vice president, governor, senates...
+
+ETC
+
+. That would not be fair, all that hard work and dedication that people put in to help the women stop sacrificing and vote and you all are going to put it to waste, you will not only dissapoint us but you will dissapoint the people who led women to vote ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8651a1a5726,4EB6E7B8DEC0,I dont think the founding fathers established the constitution for decerations I think the established it with a purpose. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48883954a44b,4EC4E3EFD09A,Driverless cars have been a big topic lately. In some ways driverless cars sound cool but they also seem a little scary. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+08667bfa518c,4EC4E3EFD09A,I think that diverless cars shouldn't be allowed on public roads because they are not safe. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+73b73c55e9ee,4EC4E3EFD09A,"Some think being able to have your car drive itself sounds nice. You could just sit in your car and listen to music while you wait to arive to your desination. Driverless cars would allow you to sit in your seat, hands on the wheel, but not acually driving. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+be3ddad614ab,4EC4E3EFD09A,"This idea does sound nice but as all other technology such as computers and phones, technology is not always reliable. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f343c8b48b67,4EC4E3EFD09A,A driverless car could cause a marjor or even fatal crash. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7781437ce6c4,4EC4E3EFD09A,While most driverless cars require you to have hands on the wheel this does not mean you will be paying attention if somthing is about to happen. All it would take is for somthing in the car to mess up and people could be very seriously hurt. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+183a382f22a6,4EC4E3EFD09A,I think that people driverless cars are not safe and they should not be allowed on public roads.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eaaf34aeb8d5,4ED5C9162A01,I think it would be a good thing for us teens to do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3cb150ebeec6,4ED5C9162A01,it will give us something to do after school of stand of going home doing nothing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4e4e59a50bd,4ED5C9162A01,"we should have field trips going to homeless neighbor hood and helping teens ,kids ,and other people ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c92ba44b9f6c,4ED5C9162A01,"We should go and serve them food and give them toys , gifts, clothes, and shoes. We should also try to take them to Disney land or castle park some where they can have fun and see things they never saw.
+
+Well my friends don't think it will be fun but i think it will be a really good time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95192bd3cdc5,4ED5C9162A01,they should give us a grade on community service because when they get home nothing to do all they do is get on the phone call their friends and eat and watch television. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0cd19ca42f70,4ED5C9162A01,This one more reason it would help the family's that really need it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64cec8140a73,4ED5C9162A01,That's why we should do it would help us on are school recorder. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e2cc7e4219d9,4EDB197A680E,A better idea for you change is that the students should have a C in the first semester to participate in sports and other activities. Then in the second semester the students must have a B to participate. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9d9aa35a8d9b,4EDB197A680E,most of the students have a grade C average ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27f822b5b604,4EDB197A680E,It wouldn't be fair for most of the students to not be able to participate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2679780d5894,4EDB197A680E,if the students see how fun it is to be able to participate in activities and they find out that the principal is going to change the grade to a B then the students are going to want to work hard to get that B. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94891707fc79,4EDB197A680E,you should change the grade to participate in sports from a B to a C is because most students have a C. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9a189a7e89e,4EDB197A680E,"It wouldn't be fair for the students that have a C. This idea will only be for the first semester.
+
+In the second semester the students will have to have a B to participate ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4ee63f671e2,4EDB197A680E,By the time the students find out how much fun it is being able to do the activities there going to find out that the grade to play the sports and other activities changed from a C to a B. The students are going to want to work hard to get that B. The students don't want to lose that privilege to be able to do any type of activity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4352ef7a9b8b,4EDB197A680E,"Therefore, you should change your idea. The students should have to have a C to participate in the first semester cause it wouldn't be fair for the students that have a C. Then in the second semester change the grade from a B to C so that the students can work hard to get a B. This idea will help kids get a better grade, to learn more, and to be a better student. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+647b0c9dd2c0,4F099BCC188A,"I know it seems odd! A human face on Mars! A lot of people have thier ideas on what it is. Some say it was an ancient civilization or people like you belive it's aliens. Well, im here to change your mind with the truth. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+834aa67d7c89,4F099BCC188A,"NASA looked into this ""face"" a lot more. Me and my crew where up all night for days just digging deeper for more information! Finally, after days of reserch I got some feed back. I unveild the images of this thing for all to see ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a196988a4742,4F099BCC188A,It was seen and proven to be a ''huge rock formation'' ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+60368b86b237,4F099BCC188A,You could argue and say aliens made it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+992d241cdafc,4F099BCC188A,"Could aliens make rock? Rock natrually happens for alot of reasons but, aliens isn't one of them ! Is there any proven facts that alliens exsist? No ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+668e37c2e46c,4F099BCC188A,After 18 long years we finally reveled it as a natrual landform. We proved that through pictures. Its hard to argue with that. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f795ab8f5453,4F099BCC188A,"NASA compared ""the face"" to the Middle Butte in the Snake river Plain of Idaho. Aliens didnt creat that. They Aren't real. So what are you going to belive?    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+927aec898666,4F46B0E32EB7,I think that we should be able to use our cell phones during lunch periods and other free time ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0836272aa3bd,4F46B0E32EB7,It would allow the students to call parents in time of need. Such as if they are injured they can use their phone to cell their parents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58954718c72e,4F46B0E32EB7,"Other students need medicine. Many children have diabetes. And having their phone allows them to call their parents. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45068a53fe1a,4F46B0E32EB7,"Reason 1.) When students are injured/hurt , such as breaking occurs, they can call their parents and to let them know what happened ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+25cdb6efec82,4F46B0E32EB7,they can go to the doctor. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70c3424e3eaa,4F46B0E32EB7,"Reason 2.) Some students have diabetes, so they have to have a needle. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+36f15e66461d,4F46B0E32EB7,"t may break, or not work right, and need another one. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32eb7601f50f,4F46B0E32EB7,Reason 3.) Some kids may be abused and not want to tell a guidance counselor or teacher. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e4041049a70,4F46B0E32EB7,"they can use their friends phone to call safe place, or 911. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d60b27227c50,4F46B0E32EB7,"Reason 4.) It allows freedom. Some kids are rebellious. So, when someone tells them something, they go against it ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6d97daf856eb,4F46B0E32EB7,"Having a phone sometimes helps this situation. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd088c16b82c,4F46B0E32EB7,"Having their phones out in class periods, should result a consequence ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+50d4a3909df7,4F46B0E32EB7,"Likewise, taking it up for a day, detention, calling parents, and so on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9fcd73e37d1,4F46B0E32EB7,"Having a phone is a privilege, children should know that. It is also a responsibility. It teaches kids, like me, to respect your elders in whatever situation God hands them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f28820d76ef8,4F6084AE3A42,"I think that keeping electoral college would be a great idea for many reasons, we have had the electoral college for many years now and it has been great it has many good benifits to it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+2c57e10f69bc,4F6084AE3A42,many people are against it they believe there vocies aren't  being heard ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b3fae5e75c40,4F6084AE3A42,but it is just be revised by that people that know what is best for the country. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a6e0752ba1a3,4F6084AE3A42,"One of the reasons the electoral college must stay is that the will be a certainty of the outcomes, they will know exacty what will be coming out as a result instead of being uncertain for example(source 1) ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d2ad84bb7a00,4F6084AE3A42,"Obama recived 6.1 percent from the electoral vote and 51.3 percent for the poplar votes. It was an uncertain vote because the college don't know what the people would pick as a result. but many people think that it should be like that because they are voting for a slate of elector and not for president.(sourse 2) 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e45d0dc3ac8b,4F6084AE3A42,Another good reason why the elctoral college is a good idea is that it balances the state votes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a971caae52f0,4F6084AE3A42,"The states that are larger such as Texas and california have a much larger population so the votes would be larger but the electoral college balances out and the smaller states such as new jersey and main have a small population so the votes wold be smaller. The larger states get more attention from the presidential candidates than the smaller states, so the electoral college balences it out.(sourse 3)
+
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e8325efc680,4F6084AE3A42,Also the electoral college avoids run-off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+77287b744c92,4F6084AE3A42,"The electoral college give more for a cleary response, for example,(sourse 3) nixon in 1968 and clinton both had 43 percent plurlity of popular votes but the electoral votes gave them a more accurate result of 301 nixon and 370 cliton. the electoral college gave a more accurate result of who sould of win the election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cfe08fedb10d,4F6084AE3A42,"That's why I think that the electoral college is better it gives certainty of outcome, balances out the big states, and avoids run-off elections. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+18521f33741d,4F616FEC40E0,"Im a scienst at NASA discussing, and im trying to discover how did these type of faces get on this planet?.So me,PROPER_NAME and my friend are trying to see how did this face get here.Then i go do some research on it and i typed the face of mars and it poped up.While im doing that i start to read about what it is saying, its says these faces have came from aliens ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f40a194e267f,4F616FEC40E0,So i look at the picture real closley and i also look at what i see in the back grown and i see all the little holes that are there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81c4a26e84ae,4F616FEC40E0,"But on april 5,1998 when mars global surveyor cydonia for the first time they shot photos of the pictures and they showed them.But they also investing in those pictures and rerally seen where they came from.But most people where not happy because the face of mars was located 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in april 1996.But nevertheless on April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in cydona and it was 25 degrees to center the face of mars ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d397eccac67,4F616FEC40E0,But there was no type of alien that made all those faces ,Position,Adequate,,,
+afb415161a43,4F616FEC40E0,it was just all of the baterica and the things that have changed over time. And also the little holes that was in the background of the picture were the rocks that hit the area and it must have got little holesin it.   ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae0a09f8c30b,4F68A8CE6F27,"Some people might think that doing community service is mindless and stupid, but i think it's a great way to help people who don't have a well planned out education or who don't have a house or just cleaning up the environment. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+535832a2c8af,4F68A8CE6F27,"I help the community out by cleaning up litter, donating my old clothes to the poor, also by donating canned food to the soup kitchen and by recycling. The people who don't want to do community service don't have to, they can just help out by donating canned foods or just recycling cans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+acb18b613215,4F68A8CE6F27,I think you don't have to make the students do community service if they don't want to. Just put up sign up sheets in the hallways and have people sign up on their own time or just create a group that cleans up the school grounds before or after school hours. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae0cebb83bb9,4F68A8CE6F27,"Some of my friends disagree with me about community service, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9aeac2a6e736,4F68A8CE6F27,but they can think what they want to think and so can I. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7cfdc7a430f2,4F68A8CE6F27,"I for one think that doing community service is a good thing. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a8fc6ce77a9b,4F72FF874556,"""The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational""(Source 2 paragraph 6).The first passage was about them in favor of doing the Electoral College. The second story was about them not in favor of them doing the Electoral College. The finnaly story was about not sure about it but they were more on the not having it side. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1d4330e7e27a,4F72FF874556,I think that we should not have it beacause it's just to much. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ef6546484b04,4F72FF874556,I think that we should not have a Electoral College because it's way to confusing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f57fbef505c,4F72FF874556,""" Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate?""(Source 2 paragraph 2)This quote means that the voters get confused sometimes when they are voting for a candidate. So if the people are voting for the wrong people then this whole thing is just a confusing mess. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+636c140b3cb5,4F72FF874556,"Futhermore,I think that we should not have the Electoral College because it's unfair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+be75e50f7ce7,4F72FF874556,"The advocates of this position are correct in argung that the Electoral college method is not democratic in a modern sense... it is the electors who elect the preident, not the people""(Source 3 paragraph 1).This quote states that the people are not the one who chose the president it's the electors. So if the people are voting and the votes dont do nothing what the point of voting? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+baaa59433739,4F72FF874556,"Finnaly,the last reason i think that we should not have that Electoral College is because it dont doing the people anything if we take it away ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+32eb6a2a1073,4F72FF874556,"""It can be agured that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may  turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-Democrats in Texas, for example or Republicans.""(Source 3 paragraph 9). This is saying that it may turn off potential voter but is all a good thing. It is not a good thing beacause most of the people that vote for a candidate are not ven getting pick. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2625d3078a4d,4F72FF874556,Now you no why i take that we should not have a Electoral College. It is best to not have on because it way to much.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f79db268e1f7,4F84013E9056,I think that we should not change the way we vote we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d3ee15fd26cd,4F84013E9056,Maybe instead of changing everything we should keep what we have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5899f86d502,4F84013E9056,"Most likely everthing will be a total disaster. If we change everything it will all fall under the pressure. We really dont need change in the world today as it is. It will be hard to get up after this big of a fall. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5469cacdbec5,4F84013E9056,Well what is bad about the Electoral College is that it is unfair for the voters that is doing the voting. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+890ade3ccba3,4F84013E9056,"Because it is all about the system of winners taking all. Some candidates dont spend time in the states. If they really know that they do not have the chance of winning. They say that this stuff is outdated and irrational. They are thinking of abolishing the Electoral College instead of keeping it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c420032c6040,4F84013E9056,But on the other hand what is good about it is that it is widely regarded as an anachronism ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+16f3bf3e8473,4F84013E9056,It is a non-democratic method of selecting a president. But it is not a democratic in a modern sense. But it is good because the people vote for a trusted slate of electors. But the trusted electors vote for the party`s nominee. Even though the Electoral College has a lack of most everything. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5c881260e493,4F84013E9056,Everyone has that one good argument. Everyone calls the Electoral College a disaster factor. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+48e594d83462,4F84013E9056,"It says that the people in America should consider themselves lucky. Well because in the year 2000 a election called fiasco was one of the biggest election crisis in the century. The legislature`s are technically responsible for picking the electors. Well also the electors can defy the will of the people. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec19ee226cdb,4F84013E9056,Also this thing can be argued. Well about changing and also maybe keeping the Electoral College. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9e7926fdbaa2,4F84013E9056,Because there is some pro`s and con`s to this situation. There is going to be up`s and down`s when it comes to this topic. There might be many more to come in the near future. This topic is one topic that everyone is arguing about this day in time ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a92d417dda5,4F84013E9056,Well thank you for taking your time and reading my essay. This was a good topic to argue about. I hope my responce will help to understand my point of view of things. I really do hope that we do keep what we have going on with the voting thing. I really do not think we should not change anything. So have a good day and once again thank you for taking the time and reading this.                        ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+987b3dc0e4a1,4F9E529C1FBD,"Community service, you want children to do community service my opinion for that is they should in some way and in another they shouldn't . ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+1ee061a54bb7,4F9E529C1FBD,Opinion one in some way the children should help out picking up trash and help with other things grownups cant do it all the time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b2f14558899,4F9E529C1FBD,Sometimes they need help so you should get involved and help out every once in awhile. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d9d86eeb64d3,4F9E529C1FBD,Opinion two in some way children should not help out ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+92310120a8b7,4F9E529C1FBD,You have too think children need every minute of their life with education . This cant be during our time of learning that help us when we get older. Children shouldn't do community service not in till they get little bit older . Time is money and money is in our education to go to college and be successful in our everyday lives. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98b49c2f4b5a,4F9E529C1FBD,My point is think about what you put off make the right decision see where the children are if they have extra time they could it after school ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ea784586415d,4FE5B872FE61,"Imagine this scenario: a person is faced with the future--new developments that may lead into the next era of technology. The question now is, should that person deny it or gladly accept it? If that person were me, I'd take it, as there is no point in staying the past and be outdated, and this is exactly how I see driverless cars. The problem now becomes, however, whether this technology is ""the future"" or not. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3b54ad541663,4FE5B872FE61,"In this essay I will discuss why cars are the future and thus, why I support them ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e16d0622df29,4FE5B872FE61,"efficency, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+746f81ee34c5,4FE5B872FE61,"error, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d54b17b9368,4FE5B872FE61,"some critics' are misguided in companion with ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa309ea18703,4FE5B872FE61,"To start, energy is being consumed in our world at a rapid rate, and much of it comes from sources that are nonrenewable once depleted like the oil used in many cars. Many have seen the solution to switch to alternative energy sources that ARE renewable; however, this does not actually address the bulk of the problem. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5e42b479199,4FE5B872FE61,The problem is actually efficency. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c008f04c928,4FE5B872FE61,"To demonstrate this, for power to reach a house from a faraway power plant, much more electricity is generated than needed as to make sure it can travel the long distance in cables without losing so much charge that the current becomes weak and useless, and a logical fix for such a problem would be to simply figure out a way to move the power source closer as to achieve higher efficencies. This same logic applies to cars in traffic, which use a lot of fuel to do essentially nothing. When I saw in the article ""Driveless Cars Are Coming"" that Google cofound Sergey Brin--who must be very intelligent as he IS the cofounder of Google, a very widely known and used company--said that these cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis AND offer far more flexibility than a bus, my only logical reaction was that this is a wonderful technology. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dfd5341d854f,4FE5B872FE61,"Transitioning to errors, a common theme of accident tragedies is the one where a person is texting and driving leading to distractions that cause the accident. This is not the only cause of accidents, though, as humans are not made to be perfect, small errors also cause accidents, but despite the wide range of things that may cause an accident, driverless cars can cover a person for that as well. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3a8c69fcdaea,4FE5B872FE61,"My first piece of evidence for this is that driverless cars are machines, and despite having a notoriously bad reputation for failing at times due to some error during the design process, machines do not tire and do not grumble about watching their surroundings; they also need not be perfect, only better than a person to become favorable as a driver. My second piece of evidence comes from, once again, ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" when it was stated that ""enetertainment and information systems that use heads up displays [...] can be turne doff instantly when the driver needs to take over [in the case that the car senses that its own computing devices are not enough to handle a situation]"". This system appealed to me a lot due to how intuitive it is; if a person shouldn't be using something, it turns off, no questions asked. All of these factors further lead me to believe that cars are ""the way of the future"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e3d7967e981c,4FE5B872FE61,despite all of these factors there are both criptics and critics for driverless cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5c409a06d68b,4FE5B872FE61,Some reasons usually brought up that haven't been addressed yet are the issues of laziness with the animated movie WALL-E coming to mind ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bb2aaa8af82d,4FE5B872FE61,"the hacking of the systems that run these driverless cars, which is equally terrifying. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3efac942f5e5,4FE5B872FE61,"hacking is commonly a misunderstood phenonenon. The aboslute requirement for all hacking is access to the device that someone wishes to hack usually through some internet connection on the device linked to other functions. This is easily remedied through the use of local software on the driverless car, cutting it off from the internet as well as making the entertainment and information systems independent of the driving system. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+055498a7c31f,4FE5B872FE61,"Getting back to the first issue about laziness, people are still sitting down whether in a driverless car or a conventional car and that these cars will likely be extremely expensive with all the added sensors for the foreseeable future, encouraging walking as an alternative to money as well as creating a walking trend so that when these technologies are cheaper, laziness would not become a problem. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+da5023c72cfa,4FE5B872FE61,"I support and adore the idea of driverless cars as they are a way to support using energy more efficently rather than going out of the way to make new sources of energy; they are a way to reduce the unnecessary ending of lives as well as unecessary drama from automobile accidents (especially for me since I'm a very accident prone person); and last but not least, they are a way to promote regular walking and get automobile internet security right. After looking through all of this, I can say for certain that driverless cars will certainly be a huge advantage to our society if only we'd give them a chance because after all, everything deserves a chance and a second for making up for its mistakes.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+70ccc0bdb775,5054EC6BA14D,In this essay im going to give you my opinion about the electoral college. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2bddbbcab623,5054EC6BA14D,"My first reason is i dont think a few 100 people should pickk the president, i think the entire nation should pick the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3dcb30253bd2,5054EC6BA14D,we dont even get the chance to vote for a president we get to vote for a slate of electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1c35629f4ea,5054EC6BA14D,ur votes might not count. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e3c7ffa5d76,5054EC6BA14D,"I dont think a few 100 random citizens should pick the president, i think the people should beccause what if the entire nation votes for one person but, the few 100 people vote for someone else. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dfb2eee70932,5054EC6BA14D,With only a few hundred electors a rich person could bribe them into choosing who they wanted and it could be someone who got no votes. It is unfair this country has 100s of millions of people and to leave it up to 370 people is proposterus. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8d19711fb8c,5054EC6BA14D,Secondly we dont get to vote for the president ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+60ddb2d219bc,5054EC6BA14D,"lets just say u live in texas and wanted to vote for for john kerry youd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry. On the off chance that those electors won the state wide election,they would go to congress and kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d28494e7d39,5054EC6BA14D,So overall Bob dole was right abolish the electoral college!         ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ef917291f78,505A9D10C001,I am very one sided with the way I feel about driverless cars. I feel that driverless cars are dangerous and hazardous. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+23c1401be189,505A9D10C001,The cars could be more prone to crashes then when a person is at the wheel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c7f0c105b8a,505A9D10C001,"""Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c1237760b5b,505A9D10C001,This states that the cars are safe for only a period of time. An all computerized car is just asking for the worse when it gets older. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9cbc61751c30,505A9D10C001,"Driverless cars aren't even really driverless, so what's the point? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+be4c5cc2bad4,505A9D10C001,"But so far, Google cars aren't truely driverless."" The idea of a driverless car may put a person to ease, to where they aren't paying attention to the road ahead. The at ease person may become stressed when the car signals to take over. They might not even be ready to take over the wheel. This is a risky thing when coming to complicated traffic issues. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3fe5c10d4721,505A9D10C001,"These driverless cars also seem to be very expensive, something not the everyday person could afford. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7eb72609d2cf,505A9D10C001,"The car has even been know to be to costly without the price of the car itself. The article talks about the use of smart roads for the smart cars. ""These smart-road systems worked suprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical."" The car itself needs a lot of mechanics, such as Dubbed LIDAR, to make sure the vehicle can mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ed170e45487,505A9D10C001,"The article talks a lot about the future of these driverless cars. But I do not think there will be such a future. With the concern of a person's life at risk, the driverless cars will intimidate many. The cost issue will also be an intimating factor. With manufacturers such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan, many will not be able to afford it. Overall, the bad outweighs the good for this project. The driverless car is simply just not worth it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+04feb8108fb8,50670624BE51,People are on the argument that NASA would hide an aliean artifact. NASA is trying to cover the possabilty of this artifact being accrute. That NASA would like to have this information to them selfs. The supporters of NASA beleve that NASA would come out with their discoverys. Both sides have a piont of but NASA starts their project to debunk these theorsist. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+5433d8f13385,50670624BE51,"
+NASA capters this photo of the red plant in the year 1976 and shows the photo to the public. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+45aa05ab0a74,50670624BE51,"This picture would become big"" it became a pop icon and starred in Hollywood films,appeared in books, and ect. Then contriverse started on this could be and an ancient civilization.""meanwhile,defenders of NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization. This wouldn't stop thorists, not in the slitest bit. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+566be1b67c70,50670624BE51,"After the surveyor srrived at the plant on September 1997 ,18 years after the program ended. NASA said""We felt this was important to taxpayers"" explained Jim Garvin. On April 5th, 1998 when the Global Surveyor flew over cydonia. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c34cbadfda0c,50670624BE51,This picture was 10 times as better as the original and shows a natural land form. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8ffa31b82af,50670624BE51,The picure showed better evidence that the theorist were wrong about an ancient cover up of anything ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d58e33704a3a,50670624BE51,"Garvin said""So,if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egtptian-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were. What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or meas. This debunks all explations of theorists every were. NASA has proven them selfs to not being the bad guys in a cover up. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4707274932bc,50670624BE51,In conclision NASA releases the picture to the press in 1976. Therists say thats NASA is trying to cover up their findings of this civilization. NASA finds out about what people are saying about a cover up .18 years later they are going back to Mars to take another photo with abetter camra ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fc4e9d12879e,50670624BE51,Everything is put to rest with the qulity of the new picture showing better textures and a clear image of this biome. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+46e6ccecfd73,50964348BC11,"So you know that face on mars right? You do, good do you thing that it was made by aliens? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+be2364a8fa39,50964348BC11,"You do, well let me tell you something it was not made by aleins it was made by comets they hit mars and they made the face because aliens are not real they are fake, so they coundn't of made them. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ea50163803f7,50964348BC11,See the comets hit mars in the right place for it to make a face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96807c597865,50964348BC11,I think that it is stuiped that people still think that aliens are real they are not real! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91b37cfbb5f1,50964348BC11,"NASA knows that aliens are fake they just want people to think that they are real so they can get more money by spreding rummers that they found a UFO that has crashed in to the earth and the weriod crop cricles that are made into the corn fields, and they make money off of that crap, I think that is stuiped that they get money on that stuff and then there is other people that are trying to find money just to feed themselfs and there childern . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29dfb5a1da8d,50964348BC11,The face in mars is just a hugh rock that got hit by some comets and the comets hit in just the right places and they made a face in that rock all the other syuff around it got hit to by a comet to so that is why places near the rock are caved in they got hit by a comet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b73b30a1013c,50964348BC11,So comets made the face in the moon not aliens because remeber aliens are not real they are fake so you can go tell other people this story and one day no one will ever think that aliens created the face in a mars rock. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb71e318a712,50DA28892569,"The Electoral College is a controversial topic in the US. This is the system used to elect the president of the United States, but most people (60% of Americans, according to source 1) believe that we shouldn't use this particular system and that we should go with the popular vote instead, while all others are strong in their stance that we should continue its use ",Lead,Effective,,,
+49062a82ba86,50DA28892569,"Under the Electoral College, it is entirely possible for a Presidential Candidate to win presidency, even with the majority of voters voting for the oposing candidate. We should discard the Electoral College in favor of the popular vote. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+797bf275e801,50DA28892569,"
+The Electoral College is a system that allots a certain amount of electoral votes to each state. Each state is given 2 electoral votes plus another amount of votes which depends on that state's population. The amount of votes ranges from 3 to 55 (source 3). A candidate must recieve 270 out of 538 possible votes. The candidate the electoral votes of a state go to is decided by the majority vote of each individual state. In all states but Maine and Nebraska give a candidate the entirety of their votes if the majority of its citizen votes for them (source 1) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c2988abac368,50DA28892569,"Some people don't even bother voting due to the fact that their vote will not contribute to their favored candidate's election. This happens often when a democratic voter lives in a republican state, and vice versa (source 3) ",Claim,Effective,,,
+910355e3fbb7,50DA28892569,"Many people stand by the Electoral College as the best course of action. They argue that the certainty of the winner is better, a candidate can't win the election due to regional favor, and this system unsures that there will still be a clear winner even when each candidate recieves the same percentage of votes. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+74c1929e5c14,50DA28892569,We began using the Electoral College in order to ensure that states with low populations weren't ignored by presidential campaigns ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e08570c6a434,50DA28892569,"However, it fails to do just that ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3303efd45d2c,50DA28892569,"Presidential candidates focus their attention to swing states, in order to win their electoral votes. Candidates have little to no need to campaign in states that have a majority of one party, because their vote is either a lost cause or all but garunteed. If this system does not do the job that it was originally intended for, then why do we continue to use it? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e46a6fe4247f,50DA28892569,"In conclusion, the electoral college is ineffective and outdated. we should no longer use this as a system of defining our president. Even though a winner is often more clear, there is still a possibility of a tie between candidates. People who support the Electoral College also argue that its a good thing due to swing states having more attention payed to them and therefore being more careful in their decision. However, this reasoning is flawed in that it assumes that citizens of a state are more likely to inform theirselves thouroughly simply because their vote holds more value, in a sense. Also, candidates would no longer pay special attention to swing states if the electoral college weren't in place so the votes of these citizens wouldn't be held above the rest. Increased value of votes is not a good thing, which this argument also assume. It is the best decision to abolish the Electoral College.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+dbfa0c2a10c4,5137514F130A,I think that when picking the president that the people of the united states should be the ones to pick instead the electoral college makes the choices of who we get for president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+331a86717d9d,5137514F130A,When you vote along with everyong else i think that the majority of the votes should get that presedent instead of everyone voteing and then it getting sent to the electoral college and them getting to pick who they want wich i dont think is right i think that the people should pick who they want by the votes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aed961e44d0d,5137514F130A,The one with the most popular vote should win. When you vote for a presidential candidate you are actually voting for slate of electors. The electoral college consist of 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. If you where running for president and you didnt have as many votes from the people as the ofter guy you can still win the election cause of the electoral college is the one that makes the decision to who we have as the president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+890fea081396,5137514F130A,It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not wing the national popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e7506bd1dcc,5137514F130A,This is a very rare thing to happen it has only ever happen twice it happen in 2000 and 1888. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11991411dc05,5137514F130A,In columbia they are allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0296a398087d,5137514F130A,In conclusion i think that it is not right that the electoral college gets to pick are president for us but i think that we should be able to pick are president by popular vote instead of haveing that electoral college.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+73d6026e5af7,51464A01F6FC,Arguements on whether the state senator should favor in keeping the Electoral College or change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States are occuring today. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+bc0ef6f92bf9,51464A01F6FC,"Each favor has its advantages and disadvantages, but we should favor in keeping the Electoral College ",Position,Effective,,,
+99a78bfd2184,51464A01F6FC,because less disputes are likely to happen ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0fe0d94fc10f,51464A01F6FC,"not voting will not effect the election. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+4389f05fb1e1,51464A01F6FC,"On the other hand, changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States has some advantages. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f3c36621f7ae,51464A01F6FC,"In ""Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"", author Bradford Plumer claims ""the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" because ""candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning."" This means that the candidates focus on the ""tight races of the 'swing' states."" To continue, Plumer also argues that changing to election by popular vote makes every vote count ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+870fe847c9e1,51464A01F6FC,"however, chaning to election by popular vote will cause mant disputes and it is not the right way to keep everyone satisfied with voting for a new president. Keeping the Electoral College is more realistic. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5fb80658133c,51464A01F6FC,"In ""Source 3: In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"", author Richard A. Posner explains that the Electoral College ""restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution."" The Electoral College gives larger states more attention from presidential candidates as opposed to a smaller state. Posner continues the idea with ""the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election."" To break it down, voters who pay close attention to the campaign will be the most thoughtful voters and they will recieve the most attention from the candidates. This reduces the amount of disputes because the presidential candidates will decide on who to give the most attention to. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+31921b57f996,51464A01F6FC,"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"", author Richard A. Posner states that ""knowing [the voters'] vote has no effect [gives them] less incentitive to pay attention to the campaign."" But, ""voters in presidential electons are people who want to express  political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide and election."" This means thatchanging everyone to a single vote will have no effect, too because people will not put thought into who to vote, but they will just vote for whoever. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d950a66546a,51464A01F6FC,"To conclude, the state senator should favor in keeping the Electoral College rather than changing to election be popular vote for the president of the United States because less disputes will occur and not participating will not be effective.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8e3512023ab1,515CEA13AEE5,The Electoral college is a place were they elect the presidant of the united states and the congress choose if they put a vote in for that presidant and his people. The process is the selection of electors next the meeting of the electors and then where would they vote for the presidant and the vice presidant and the counting of the electoral votes by congress the elctoral college consists of 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to vote for the presidant. The presidants election is held every four years on a tuesday after the first monday in November ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b103e11a02fc,515CEA13AEE5,i think that why would you have the electoral college when you can just vote some other way insted of having this big thing just to elect the presidant and the vice presidant why can't you just have a regular meeting deciding if you are voting for that presidant and the vice presidant the electoral college to me makes no sense why would you have this big thing that makes no sense at all ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9b66e34192a3,515CEA13AEE5,if you wanted to vote for the presidant then vote i dont get why you have to go through a big system just to vote i think its just easier just to vote a regular way and it takes so long and it also depeneds on what state you are in and how you have to vote in texas if you wanted to vote for a certain person you would have to vote for the slate of 34 or what the number of that person is like for example if you voted for Jhon Kerry you would have to vote for slate of 34 democratic electors it just depends on the state ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c764b5aaa675,515CEA13AEE5,"what if there was a tie the election it would be thrown into the house of representatives where the state delegations vote on the presidant and the vice presidant cause only each state casts one vote a single representatives from Wyoming representing 500,000 voters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+813197ce0829,515CEA13AEE5,this is why i think we should not have the electoral college becuase it causes to much cauase throught all the steps you have to go through it takes so much time up and there is so many other thing we can be focusing on i think the electral college needs to be gone and over with and we need to find other ways to vote for the presidant and the vice presidant ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a918baa46aaa,515E8B741A54,"I think that you should help change the way we vote. In my opinion, its complete nonsense that this ""Electoral College"" process is used ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8c54952ac6ec,515E8B741A54,"If there are citizens who want a good president, and the Congress wants different, it's pretty obvious that the citizens are going to be beyond disappointed that someone different was chosen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c21a0f81b497,515E8B741A54,"First off, I suggest that some states stop using the ""winner-takes-all"" system. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea7252d6a722,515E8B741A54,"I think that process is outrageous. Do you really think this process is choosing the right person to run our country? Just because the Congress likes this system, doesn't mean we, the people of the United States, preferably enjoy it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff42a5dac058,515E8B741A54,"Next, I believe that we should be able to choose our electors, because some people in the government make mistakes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+56dc2e55397b,515E8B741A54,"Sometimes people are wrong about other people. Each state only casts one vote, so we better make the best out of it, right? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1cbcab9d785,515E8B741A54,"Also, there is a few reasons why this process is good. One reason why is because if there wasn't this secure system, it would probably be total chaos. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8698e6ba5051,515E8B741A54,Another reason is that this system helps choose which president will do the better for the United States. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+7dcae03b4764,515E8B741A54,"Overall I think that this a bad process, and I think they should change this. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6507810ecc7d,5163679C254B,"personally, i don't think community service should be required ",Position,Adequate,,,
+852750ad79e8,5163679C254B,if its not your thing your not going to want to do it and your not going to have fun doing it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cda45c711c8,5163679C254B,"I don't think it is much fun to do but i do it with my church anyways. This year a am going to go down to LOCATION_NAME and i am going to help with community service things we well be doing is helping hand out food and helping plant and things people cant do by themselves. I have a lot of friends that do cool stuff like that too. But if you require it makes it sound more like homework, and then kids wont be so excited about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a36905938f2,5163679C254B,"I think community service is about volunteering, if you want to volunteer and help out the community you should. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0984a05ea28e,5163679C254B,Another trip i' m doing this year or next is going to my sister church in Mexico and helping them out with a group from my church. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2555b784041,5163679C254B,Some kids don't have enough time there either to busy with sports or x box or something ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+914865708072,5163679C254B,"but they should still make some time to volunteer, even if its not huge, they could collect food for a food bank or something small ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4e57ba79410d,5163679C254B,that's what i think about requiring community service. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+caa2b8e66306,516557988F8B,I believe that the policy of having at least a B average to participate in school sports or activities is the correct thing to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4bd963175867,516557988F8B,"students who don't have at least a B average, or better, won't be able to handle having a good grades in school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+918c158e4a59,516557988F8B,They'll either be to busy to not do homework or to lazing to do school work. Or the student will be too sleepy in class. Also the student might not be focusing in school as much as they used to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e31e343c97df,516557988F8B,f the below B average student goes to his or hers sport practices or meetings they would probably neglect their homework and school work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d77d020f019e,516557988F8B,Which would cause the student to get an even lower grade average! Unlike with an A or B student who would always at least try to complete their school work and homework. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2023abf028c2,516557988F8B,the student wouldn't have enough sleeping time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9936251d9108,516557988F8B,which again would make them struggle in school even more. If the below B average student was actually worried about their below average gradethey would ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1d0afcb34475,518B562DBD6B,"I would want you to keep The Electoral College the same for its been up to Congress and popular votes from the citizens to elect the President and Vice President all this time. If we change The Electoral College , we might end up having to change a few more things. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1399af086a30,518B562DBD6B,So far The Electoral College has kept this country great with its voting way for President and Vice President. Changing The Electoral College will break its original way of the Constitutional compromise between the election of President and Congress. The original way is what made this country the way it is today. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2228c1ff2a14,518B562DBD6B,"Sure people argued over The Electoral College in 2000 , but that was 15 years ago ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23d68b217ce4,518B562DBD6B,"If we change The Electoral College , we could be changing the coountry. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+93f2fa35dba6,518B562DBD6B,It's better for the country that we don't change The Electoral College ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6388bd959a07,518B562DBD6B,"plus it would save Cogress , senators , the President , and Vice President time and paper work ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+425ed63f2a2b,51CD300AB688,the Electoral College are not making votes fair for other people ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5bd241831b64,51CD300AB688,"To begin with, I personally think the Electoral College should change because over the years after people voted it seemed they wanted to change it, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4a689de7d669,51CD300AB688,"so they decide to cause a riot around there city, maybe the U.S. Some people do not like how the Electoral Law is set for our U.S. My opinion is that some of the people running for presidents usually get helped, not only by us, but by other members of the Electoral Collage. As you see the evidence is how you turn on the T.V at night and see what is going on with the vote and election. For example Afganiscan, they are destroying there country becuase of how much they dislike our president, because of a unfair vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+91435c958d00,51CD300AB688,Think about it would any of this happen if the Electoral College made things fair with making people at least vote twice? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+74009d8df227,51CD300AB688,"As you see how other people are getting deeply hurt of what you are doing. Now am not asking you to abuse this opinion just to make people happy, but the main topic of what i am writing you is to think and observe around you. According to everyone else opinion, i am not only speaking for me now, but people are thinking to redo the election. People all country would like to vote for the same president of the U.S i know there are some states that have a president but like im saying, they want to change that. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98a8cc75b4ac,51CD300AB688,"People can see that its up to us to choose who is president, but its not the members of the Electoral College job to add more credit to the person losing or winning ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3497482489be,51CD300AB688,"People are dieciding to make plans because they do not get things there way. Just like the riot in paris with the terriots, there had to be a reseason for it. Think about it why would terriots want to kill people? Not only for fun but because of the presidential voting. Every bad thing on the U.S is mainly about voting. Just like people holding up signs on the street to change there election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+057ab2f31ab4,51CD300AB688,As you can see the Electoral College is really selfish. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d71908a99e58,51CD300AB688,"They tend to pay more attensiion to themselves but not others. They do it for the money and the fact to usually get other people upset. The presidents that the Electoral Collage want to win they win. Its a fact that most presidents win to easy. They win with a plethora of help, not only with the U.S but with the members of the Electoral Collage. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c56669a636cd,51CD300AB688,"In Conlusion, the electoral colage has to think about other people. They ned to focus more on the atmoshpere then sitting in one small room thinking about themselves.  ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cb3028b1073b,520545C18283,Should there really be an Electoral College?  ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+416867719f79,520545C18283,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce and the AFL-CIO have all agreed on abolishing the electoral college, and so do I! ",Position,Effective,,,
+6cfae9b5f30c,520545C18283,Not very many people really understand what the electoral college really is ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67e6d816fa76,520545C18283,The electoral college was established into the Constitution by our founding fathers as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of citizens. The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Wherever you live your states allotment of electors is equal to the number of members in its Congressional delegation. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c4339f04269e,520545C18283,"Each canidate running for president has his/her own group of electors. The electors are usually chosen by the canidates political party. But each state has different laws. It depends on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. The Presidental election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. Whenever you vote for whom ever you want to be President, you are also helping choose your states electors. Whenever you vote for your canidate you are actually voting for your canidates electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+516b7c399813,520545C18283,"Your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertianment"" after the presidential election listing all of the canidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors. Also, the certificate declares the winning of the presidential canidate in your state and it shows the electors that will represent your state at the meeting of electors in December of the election year. Your certificate is then sent to the Congress and the National Archoves as part of the official records of the presidential election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+92c0faa02a26,520545C18283,"Now, im sure there are many many people that agree with me that we should get rid of the electoral college. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the one we have now ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+68df06e02124,520545C18283,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The electoral college doesn't try to fix the problem of elections in which no canidate receives  a majority vote, they just ignore it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16c269b7e0e0,520545C18283,"I think that it is the popularity vote that should decide who gets the most amount of votes and decides who become the next President of the United States. I think that the Electoral college is unfair to the citzens around the U.S.
+
+I always thought that it is us, the people that got to decide who we believe should become the next president, not the canidates electors. I believe that our votes should decide who become the next President, not the electoral votes. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37e231c22f36,52233E7A7574,"Helping the community is a good thing, but people don't have to do it if they don't want to. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5f519b1d3f5e,52233E7A7574,But students should help out the community. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c3aa0089638,52233E7A7574,"i think since that we live in a good/bad community i think it would be good to help out the environment, or help younger individuals get a better education. Other community services require like babysitting, donating food, or donate money, not all community services are long and time wasting. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a92dcfa080c,52233E7A7574,"If all the students did community service, then the community would be way better for the young and the old. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e711175b722f,52233E7A7574,"examples of a bad community for the young and the old would be like pollution in the air and on the ground, if everyone was smoking it would increase the chances of the elderly and young to get a lung disease like asthma. Or if we left litter on the floor babies could eat the litter and could go to the hospital or even die. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0d17af3a898,52233E7A7574,"i recommend that everyone does community service even if the students don't want to, its good for the environment, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d8627251209e,52233E7A7574,"the people, and the learning. If we did community service we would be a roll model for younger individuals and they would want to do community service as well and the cycle would keep repeating. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e93a0b29e97,52233E7A7574,Though some of the community services we may do could be very dangerous. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c4b3d135162b,52233E7A7574,"like picking up litter in the highway, some kid could walk out in the street to get a piece of trash then get hit by a car. I'm just saying that we don't use our heads sometimes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+63646ef7b0fc,52233E7A7574,But what i' m getting to is that community service would be a great idea for everyone to do. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+213bf3ea7155,52233E7A7574,If we did do community service more people would come to this town and that means more students and more money for the school! ,Claim,Effective,,,
+88f2bcbc1fcf,52233E7A7574,"which means we could improve some of the things this school lacks, like more space in the rooms, and a larger cafeteria. The schools budget would be sky rocketing. So were pretty much doing each other a favor like a i scratch your back, you scratch mine. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+896f2246b8fd,52233E7A7574,"If people got word that were doing this good cause then the news would become an epidemic! more and more schools would start doing this making the world a better place to live in and there would be no more murder, robbery, or bullying. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cbe4bfe4a71,52233E7A7574,helping the community would be a great achievement for everyone. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dbc233bd40da,522A99CEF90C,"Many would seem to object to the thought of having to maintain a B average to participate in sports, but I for one, agree. ",Position,Effective,,,
+69e12a31d18a,522A99CEF90C,"Students may take it as unfair, but they do not realize that without education, they have nothing. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+db7e4e7a185b,522A99CEF90C,"To get into better universities, they will not accept grades that are not exceptional, let alone standard. I believe these students are trying to ""just get by"" in their class work, leading them to become irresponsible, lazy, and completely oblivious to the fact that the better jobs out there require more than a ""standard"" degree. Most school athletes believe that right out of high school, they will be drafted into a professional sports career, and for some, it is true. However, the statistics of ever making it into a professional league is slim, and for those who don't make it, and sadly don't care about their education, and end up getting a job that pays little to none and wishing that they did what they were supposed to do in school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7a3e7345fa69,522A99CEF90C,"A lot of the time, my fellow students think that average is good enough, and it's sad to say that I know that some of them won't do well out of school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9bef9f6d6186,522A99CEF90C,"I know students who are going to drop out of school or not go to college, and it breaks my heart to see them make those mistakes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+168040363112,522A99CEF90C,"I do understand that there are students who just don't understand the work, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2e868b802015,522A99CEF90C,"but a lot of the time, they don't get help with it, making harder on them self. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b92a7c3b2c5b,522A99CEF90C,"Honestly, if you expect to do sports and get a good education, a C is not good enough. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c0e9c1f42695,522A99CEF90C,"I also think it is a great idea to not allow students to partake in school activities, such as dances and field trips, if their grades are not up to par. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac76260343b3,522A99CEF90C,"If students want to have fun they should want to get their grades up. We teens and pre-teens anticipate so much from the everyone and everything, but we don't understand when our parents or teachers want us to succeed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+971036464510,522A99CEF90C,"To make a long story short, why should students be able to do what they want, if they are not doing what they need to do. Grades are just as influential as having fun so that's why I agree with you that they should maintain a B average to participate in sports and activities. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+59faa3c793f5,52432D25C86B,"Some people in the America are worried about the voting for the president. Some people are in favor of keeping the Electoral College, and other are in favor of channging the voting system to popular vote. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+132374b2b92c,52432D25C86B,"Going in favor of Electoral College has only one good favor like in Source 1 it says that ""The Cerificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent oyur state at the meeting of the electors in Decemeber of the election year."" ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+ef6bbeddc743,52432D25C86B,"In the Electoral College there is somthing a bit unfair, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd7b00c6c896,52432D25C86B,"if on of the presidential cadidate went after the bigger city's like Florida,Texas,or California (as showed in the picture in Source 3) the would have a big lead in the race for one of the cadidates. If one of the presidential cadidates got all three of them then it would be like a win-win for them. After they got those three it would be that hard to go after which ever state he want to get to vote for him. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86d760fcb0c3,52432D25C86B,"
+Even though Electoral College is a good way popular vote would give a clear vote on who would win the presidential election. If we went with popular vote it would just matter on the people's vote on who they woluld want in the White House. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4767723f1f18,52432D25C86B,"If there is a tie, then the should find one person off the streets and ask them who would they want to win the presidential election. All they would have to do is give him a piece of paper with both names and he would pick one. If the state went to popular votes then Obama and Romney would most likely had a closer race then what it was. In Source 2 it says ""According to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct electin to the kind we have know."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8c029df1379c,52432D25C86B,"
+But know that you know some people in America don't like the Electoral College and saw what they had to say mabye just mabye you will consider changing how we the people ofAmerica vote to choose who we want in the White House.    ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b94d7ff7058b,525E2FD50DBF,"There are many reason why Electrol College should not be kept, but it is the right thing if we change it to election by popular vote ",Position,Adequate,,,
+12dec1fc4d3f,525E2FD50DBF,This Reason why I pick this is because us people want the right leader to leads us on a good path thats why we are citizens our job is to vote to them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f20a7dfe5cf9,525E2FD50DBF,The electrol college is not the best option because the electrol college doesn't give everyone an oppurtunity to select who they want as there leader ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1dffebb75c5d,525E2FD50DBF,"In article three where it says ""Everyone's President"" the author states that ""No region (South,Northeast, etc.) has enough electrol votes to elect a president."" This mean that most of the states in the south do not get the chance to vote for a presiden and this increases Romney chances of wining, and what if the candidate that wins with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president? The citizens of the United States will feel as if they aren't apart of this country, not giving the rights or freedom this country promised them. The citizens will feel like their votes do not count, when they have there opinion on something the new president will have no interest towards it, this means to us that he isn't really a president. In article last paragragh the author states ""people who think that a single vote may decide an elcetion.""In the past plenty of ties had happened before they handled this by the election would be thrown to the House of Representative. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cba0ffbfb261,525E2FD50DBF,Election by popular vote is fair in both ways they give the people a chances to pick who they want and who will make a difference to our country. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+be43df976a16,525E2FD50DBF,"Its not fair if we vote and if we don't have enough electrol college our votes don't count in our region, that takes away what we been living in this country for. In the past they agreed on abloshing the electrol college also the article states that ""over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now."" As citizens it's important to listen to what we have to say cause we are the people who make up this country. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+579f6cefe6b8,525E2FD50DBF,They don't want election by popular vote cause they are afraid that a tie will happen because an election usually stops around 538 ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c3378f1a84a2,525E2FD50DBF,but it is highly unlikey to happen ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9ac1a414daa6,525E2FD50DBF,it only happened twice in history for election by popular vote in 1968 by Richard Nixon and 1992 by Bill Clinton. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a507f1dff54,525E2FD50DBF,"There are many reason why Electrol College should not be kept, but it is the right thing if we change it to election by popular vote. This Reason why I pick this is because us people want the right leader to leads us on a good path thats why we are citizens our job is to vote for them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ac1e634dd8f1,527B7AAC2310,"What is so important about home schooling? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+873732704b4b,527B7AAC2310,I think that students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+79229e2a798a,527B7AAC2310,because students would not have the amount of social activity as others ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d02ac6b3699f,527B7AAC2310,they also would not learn the amount of information as they would in school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c3ba14e42e34,527B7AAC2310,Students would'nt benefit from being able to attend classes from home because students would'nt have the amount of social activity as others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef59d3a09a79,527B7AAC2310,"studies show that five out of ten students are more distant just by taking classes from home. Being in a school can improve your communication skills that can be used in interviews, presentations, performances, or even if your just speaking to family or friends. It's one of the most important thing you'll need in life. Taking online classes at home is a totally different environment then being at school. At home you only have a few people you can talk to for help which could be your parents, family, or your teacher. School is different you have students everywhere, teachers, and friends that can help you with anything such as personal problems, injuries, and school work. Being at school can help you learn more life lessons then being at home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6cfcd005ad21,527B7AAC2310,Students would'nt benefit from being able to attend classes from home because students wouldnt learn the amount of information as they would in school ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+66e4350fa186,527B7AAC2310,"School shows you everything you need in life like Science, History, Math, a language, English, how to read, write, even how to cook. Learning from school can show you anything you want to know from the basics to an even deeper perspective.
+
+Learning more than the necessary can improve you more as a student and as person. Will show you thinks you'd need in the future even things you need now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5e4aaa6bc14,527B7AAC2310,"I know that some students are home schooled because of popularity, they might always be on the road to new places, medical reasons, or the environment just is'nt for them. Some students choose to not go to public school because of bullying and I understand that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f6bd4399b2c,527B7AAC2310,Everyone has a reason to be home schooled ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+14ff130bd75e,527B7AAC2310,"but you should'nt be home schooled just because your ""to tired"" and you dont want to wake up early in the morning. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5d8b8a7c2854,527B7AAC2310,"Home schooling shows us more about our future. Whoever thought that students would be able to take classes from home or even through video conferencing? 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c148aa155097,527B7AAC2310,"Going to school will make you grow in a way you've never seen before. You'll learn more than the basics, you'll learn how to interact with people, and you'll learn so much more. Step by step you'll start to grow and learn new things on the way. Everyone is different and everyone will gravitate things in different ways. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1567e97abdde,52835AA731FA,Do you think the Face is just a natural landform or a face proving alien life forms? Do you think it is bona fide evidence for life on Mars? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+388da6dd2deb,52835AA731FA,"I'm a scientist at NASA and the Face, a lot of people seem to think was formed by aliens or is proof of alien life forms, is actually just a natural landform ",Position,Effective,,,
+d2dcf3d24ff5,52835AA731FA,"The Face is just a natural landform because it was a cloudy day on Mars when the spacecraft took the pictures, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+614ed2eadc19,52835AA731FA,"you would be able to see objects in the pictures if there were any, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3feda77aa607,52835AA731FA,"and the picture actually shows the Martian. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6e0cd7fcee9b,52835AA731FA,"The Face is just a natural landform on the planet of Mars, not something created by alien life forms or evidence of life on Mars ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+122b90f0fcb6,52835AA731FA,"For example, when the pictures were taken, it was a cloudy day on Mars. The clouds casted shadows on the landform to make it look like a face. There were no alien markings. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+841a7ee547e0,52835AA731FA,If there were objects in the pictures you would be able to see them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+acc32260a4bb,52835AA731FA,You would be able to see the objects because you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6afdda88f65f,52835AA731FA,The picture actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b18a9b7ce1d,52835AA731FA,They are common around the American West. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d95d5107ba1,52835AA731FA,"Do you still think the Face on Mars was actually created by aliens? Do you still think it is bona fide evidence of life on Mars? The Face is just a natural landform because pictures were taken on a cloudy day, where the clouds could cast shadows on the landform. You would also be able to see any objects in the pictures if there were any. There is a chance of life on Mars because there is water found on Mars. The Face is not evidence of life on Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dcad37109fd6,52D49831B279,"For many students, missing school can be something that can put a wrench in their progress. Out of school, students miss assignments, lectures, and tests, which can be detrimental to their grades and their overall GPA. Some schools have decided to use distance learning as an alternative to missing school, by allowing their students to attend a class from home using video chats or conference calls, when they are at home. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4fb014309550,52D49831B279,"This allows students who are sick, or have emergencies come up, to attend classes and to not fall behind. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b6babb21dcb,52D49831B279,"Having the option to attend class at home has many benefits for students, and would help to raise many students GPA's, due to the flexibility that the distance learning would offer. ",Position,Effective,,,
+ed822a280487,52D49831B279,"Some students have low immune systems, and are sick often throughout the entire school year. Because of the fact that we would fall behind, many students will go to school no matter how sick, in order to attend class and keep their grades up. This leads to overall low performance, and low sanitation, as germs from the sick students will be on everything that they touch. Those who do stay home however, have to go back to school and make up every missed assignment, test, quiz, and homework for each class that they miss. Some schools have eight periods in a day, meaning that the student would fall behind in all of their classes. Make up work takes a lot of time and piles up quicker than many think, and staying on top of old and new subjects can overwhelm some ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec544ede7713,52D49831B279,"If given the option to attend classes from home, more students would stay home and get the rest that they need in order to be healthy, because they would have an opportunity to stay on top of school, and not fall behind the rest of their class. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+479f58dc391b,52D49831B279,One other benefit for students would be for those who have family emergencies pop up. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7f8cc9cd230a,52D49831B279,"Everyone has them, students and faculty alike. Some families live out of state or in other countries, causing students to be forced to miss weeks at a time. Throughout these weeks, the students would miss many lectures, assignments, tests, quizzes and important projects. Allowing those who are gone to stay on top by using a computer, would allow students to focus more on their family in a time of worry, instead of worrying how they are going to make up their test in their third period math class. The stress of having a family emergency on top of the already extremely stress inducing schoolwork, can become too much for many, leaving them exhausted and unable to catch up. The inability to catch up for some, can cause them to drop out of school all together, as the stress and pressure would build and build up. This can ruin students' futures and take a lot of opportunities out of their hands. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+76ba9b86099a,52D49831B279,"Furthermore, a lot of students live further away from the school, and a lot of the time, rely on the bus to get to and from school. On days where the student were to sleep in late, or the bus doesn't come, the student would have to stay home and miss class. While some have the option to ask a relative for a ride, others do not, causing issues at home and at school for those who are unable to make it due to transportation issues. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+570bb017653a,52D49831B279,"Being given the option to work on school at home, students would not have to rush to find a ride if the bus doesn't show, and waking up late for the bus would not be as big of an issue ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7329344c6e8d,52D49831B279,"Students could thrive and grow instead of having to wait to make up the assignments missed. Family health would balance out and less focus on how much school that the student is missing will show. Students who are unable to drive especially would benefit from distance learning if they are unable to get to school. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d193aa536835,52D49831B279,"On the other hand, some argue that students will use the distance learning less as a tool, but more as a crutch, so that they don't have to attend classes and can stay home whenever they want. People believe that the longer that students are required to show up and are given less options to make it up at home ,the more drive to show up at school will be seen. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+05165e275fc7,52D49831B279,"This however is not the case. Many students in the classroom, have stated that they wish that they could do more at home, so that if they miss school, they aren't rushing to get back on top ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f273bff99769,52D49831B279,"Many students begin to stop caring when they fall behind, which leads them to stop showing up and stay home. If offered a tool to stay on top while at home, they would not feel the stress or the pressure of missing class due to being sick, or the things thrown their way. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96f6fb20c627,52D49831B279,"Distance learning is one of the best tools that could be used for those who need it. Life is full of bumps and turns that some do not always expect. These bumps and turns can take students out of the classroom and cause them to fall behind their peers. Stress and loss of the drive to learn are linked, and can be seen in any classroom no matter where. Throughout the years, technology has grown and evolved. Instead of complaining about the evolution of technology, teachers and parents should be able to embrace it, and the tools that it brings students. Distance learning has many more benefits than downsides and downfalls. More schools should implement it, to adjust and accommodate to the students' needs, instead of the students having to adjust their needs for the school system. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e5c2f6e7e85c,530A7F55A2DC,"Cars are a big deal in our everyday society. We use cars all the time because they are what get us from place to place. As we go further into the future, more improvements on cars are being made each day. One major invention is the driverless car ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e2f2031f4703,530A7F55A2DC,The development of the driverless car is a good thing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+615e513751cd,530A7F55A2DC,it is convenient ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+04c3b0c4eae3,530A7F55A2DC,"safe, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a1964a8e49d3,530A7F55A2DC,fuel-saving ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4b9b8d770a31,530A7F55A2DC,beneficial to our knowledge on cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b0be940dec2,530A7F55A2DC,Many people are always needing to travel from place to place and don't always want to drive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+315a8c18d440,530A7F55A2DC,"It's more convenient to just hitch a ride from someone such as a friend or a taxi. But sometimes those aren't always the most convenient options. Taxi drivers could take someone anywhere or your friend could be under the influence. Driverless cars are safer because they could take you where you need to go safely. They are also more convenient because sometimes people could be impaired and unable drive, so they would just have a driverless car pick them up instead. This way, it is convenient for people to travel without worrying if they are going to be safe or not. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cfe1293e22e9,530A7F55A2DC,A main factor in people buying cars is if they are safe. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3811da7220fc,530A7F55A2DC,"According to the article on Driverless Cars Are Coming, these independent cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. People could be safer in a driverless car than with someone driving a car. Safety is a huge deal in our society and people buying cars want what's best for them and their families. If driverless cars are safer, companies will have good sales and produce better profit. This way, the economy is being benefitted and so is society. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77c569ca52fc,530A7F55A2DC,"In the world today, we try to conserve our resources as much as possible. Fuel is a major resource that is used to power a lot of things in everyday life ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c075510a4832,530A7F55A2DC,"By using driverless cars, we would limit our use of fuel to half of what taxis use, and that is phenomenal ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e24c4a3496e9,530A7F55A2DC,"The research on these cars is significant for people in the future. Many years ago we would have never known all the important things about technology that we know today. By researching and testing the technology of the driverless car, we have produced more efficient knowledge for the future. Driverless cars need sensors to operate similar to a human driving the car, which is important to creating cars ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82138f4f772d,530A7F55A2DC,"Without researching and inventing these important products, we wouldn't have half the knowledge on cars that we have today. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4cbfaa558d7d,530A7F55A2DC,"Driverless cars are beneficial to us because they are convenient, safe, fuel-saving, and important to our knowledge on cars. Driverless cars can help people in society and people in the future. The development of these cars can influence people to create even bigger things in the future and that is incredible. The future is brighter than it has ever been, and the development of such a product has made this possible. The future is bright and driverless cars have led us further down the road to creating newer, better inventions ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+17838b25402e,530F622827DE,"Dear senator, I heard that there are people thinking on wanting to keep or change the electoral college.
+
+well in the electoral college you have electors,senators and we use them for when we vote for our new president ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+51a47d5fb723,530F622827DE,But what I think you should do is change the electoral college as it is now. You want to kno why well here I will tell you what I think you should keep it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1187b8f75120,530F622827DE,"First, the presidential election is held every four years so you can vote for the president you want to vote for. Also when you vote for your candidate you're actually voting for candidate's electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+caf4dc688f75,530F622827DE,"Some people that are voting don't know that they're voting for their candidate's electors. In some states they have different decisions in the electoral college. Like for example in state conventions,state party's central commitee,and sometimes even the presidential candidates. Voters can get confused on these kinds of things in the electoaral college because the electoral college sometimes hasn't made a decicion yet on how or what they want to do or say. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f78dc677d83,530F622827DE,"Next, the electoral college is unfair to voters because of th winner take all system. In each the candidates don't spend their time in the states that have no chance of winning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ab5e14d9d4b6,530F622827DE,"On the year of 2000, the campaign of seventeen states didn't get to see the candidates at all including Rhode Island and South Carolina. Not even the largest media markets got to see a single campaign ad. But in ohio they probably have a chance on having a good argument for putting the presidency in the hands of a small amount of voters. These are some reasons why some people might want to change the electoral college because it's unfair to some states and people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b5a9e31baa8,530F622827DE,"In addition,the they're outcomes in the electoral college like in the year of 2012 an outcome happened. It happened when they were voting for Romney or Obama. Obama recieved a 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to 51.3 percent of the the popular votes for him and Romney. That happened when the number of votes possibly was 538 thats an even number of votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3a0b7a7bab9,530F622827DE,"But having an even number is kind of good but it's higly an unlikely number. when that happens the state creates a landslide electoral vote victory the state. 
+",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+192134b6e748,530F622827DE,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in where no candidate recieves a high number of votes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6c8b2c4f357c,530F622827DE,Like with Nixon and Clinton they both had 43 percent of popular votes. In winning the electoral college 301 and 370 votes there is pressure for run-off elections when tere is no candidate wins.         ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a361cfde50c,5369752CEAB0,Well i think that we should use phones but if anyone sees tell people to put there phone away. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+9600e95b552a,5369752CEAB0,"They can use them when need to or on break to get a drink . They should not be able to have phones with them because they might use it in class or might take it out at class. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a6748dd7371,5369752CEAB0,If i were to see the phones i would say put it back in your book bag and do not take it out. If i saw someone with a phone out i would get mad and might give the people a talking to also i might even say i need your phone fro the rest of the day. Tell them i will not give your phone back the next time and i will call home if i have to. Now i would make it a law not to have phones with students and also band the phones. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53b5f7a506d9,5369752CEAB0,One thing i do not get is why high school has to have boo bags with them .They should have the phones in the book bags . They should just leave the phones in there locker or book bag .I am going to high school next year so maybe they school make a new rule about phones. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a1e5daeb457,5369752CEAB0,Now if it was something really bad then i can see having your phones with us and or next to us .My friend gets to have her phone with her at all times because she is able to have her phone with her but she goes to a different school and it is far away . when i get older i might want to help people with the same problem so i might protest and see what every school will say. I thin k they will think it is all right to have a phone in book bags just not with you at all times. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+789954524194,5369752CEAB0,I might tell people people that it is all right to be different and to not worry if you have to have a phone with you at all time and if not to aversive that we do not all need phones and to just be ok without phones. Just remember that some people may not even may not phones. Also be happy for what you have not what others have. I mean come to your senses that not all people are lucky for what they and some even want more then they want or need. Just remember what i said and take some advise and stick with people who need need more then we do .Iwant to help people when i grow up and show the time to care. i care a lot about people. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f95d5c1d77e,53858BE44997,I reconsider that are principal should let us eight graders bring are cell phones to school and allow us to use them at all time except during class. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b433f083d02c,53858BE44997,I think if are principle allow us to use are phones all eight grader will probably appreciated what the principle will let us do . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f4d6d7364a1,53858BE44997,I think the reason why are principle wont let us use are phone is because there afraid that if someone phones get stolen or lost the school would have to be responsible for it or be in charge. Also a lot of teachers recommend us students not to use them during class or any were else ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+871246184a26,53858BE44997,Because a lot of teachers have said that we shouldn't because if we were to use are cell phones a lot of people wouldn't be pay attention or follow direction or doing any class work like were suppose to be doing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6be6fb5585de,53858BE44997,"Also i think because if we were to use our cell phones we would pay more attention to our phones then our work, and also it will be ringing and disturbing the class when most students wanna learn. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9fb11dd645b,53A912957FE2,I would tell them that the face is not created by aliens because if it was there would be a sign of some sort like there could be possibley more then one of the faces. Also there could have maybe been a symbol of some sort that could tell you or us that it may be out of this world. So studies tell us it isn't a alien monument because well when you look at the picture or image that was taken in 2001. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+589b7d7dc070,53A912957FE2,It looks more like a rock or a mesa not something made. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+04181a0598a9,53A912957FE2,Yes it may look a alien or something out in space made it ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+9441e99a67c1,53A912957FE2,but there is so much more proof you would need to prove it. Just think to your self how could you have proved that it was made by aliens? What proof do you have ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+f19fd62c43a3,53A912957FE2,On my side I know it in fact that it could not have been created by a alien because of the pictures tooken. It just doesn't seem like it was created by an alien it just looks like a cool rock that is really out there not created by something from out there. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e52d32ff4a68,53A912957FE2,Yes I do see why you or some people would get that it looks out of this world ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+b2711f3c846f,53A912957FE2,"it it's really just a landmark on Mars. Yes there may be conspiracys and theories about how this rock or face was made, but there may not be any facts to prove it completly. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0f78da21c583,53A912957FE2,"So in conclusion it is not a alien made face it simply in a mesa or a landmark on Mars. The proof is in the article when you see the 3 picutes that were taken to prove it wasn't a alien made artifact. No matter how cool it would be if it was not to mention that it could make NASA famous or rich it just doesn't have the proof you need to be a alien artifact. If you look more into the passage it even says it was not a alien made artiffact. Yes this face was very famous it even says ""The ""Face"" on Mars has since been a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, apperered in books, magazines, and even radio shows."" (5). See how famous that face was 25 years ago is amazing but it still doesn't mean it was a alien made artiffact. So in final say it is not a alien made face and nor will there be enough proof its just a landmark on Mars that was very popular to people everywhere!           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+96ad4fa05e89,53B21C3A440F,"Technological innovations have changed the way students learn. There are now more accessible and faster ways to acquire information for projects, homework, and for classroom learning. Computers, cell phones, and tablets are beginning to be used more and more by school systems .
+
+These devices can be useful in the classroom, but they do not help with certain crucial aspects ",Lead,Effective,,,
+242f90191026,53B21C3A440F,Online classes are not as beneficial to students as classroom learning ,Position,Adequate,,,
+603cf2dd706d,53B21C3A440F,it does not develop student's social skills ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6a657651b0c9,53B21C3A440F,"nor provide materials that are necessary for them to learn. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+6b4f7220942c,53B21C3A440F,Students who attend classes from home do not benefit socially ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf5ce28565c1,53B21C3A440F,"Group work is important because students learn how to compromise, communicate, and get along with different types of people. If learning is done online, they miss out on the opportunity to develop their social skills. Social skills are necessary in day to day life since we are constantly interacting with other people such as bosses, coworkers, and strangers, for example, at a grocery store. Students should be able to develop those skills throughout their school years so they can be successful in the real world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1b0da5264655,53B21C3A440F,"Moreover, classroom learning promotes comradery and friendships. Having friends in class makes learning more appealing and interesting. For example, debates and seminars develop critical thinking skills since other students can have a different, challenging perspective to share amongst each other about a topic; this causes them to respect each others opinions and promotes communication skills. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0f23b9f4d514,53B21C3A440F,"In addition, schools offer free materials and services that are not available at home ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4f985b308216,53B21C3A440F,"A copious amount of books are accessible in the school's library and can easily be checked out without the student needing to find transportation to the closest public library. Devices such as computers, printers, and laptops can be used by students to complete and turn in homework. Various teachers in schools have gone to college and are experienced in their subject and can go more in depth into learning material if a student did not understand it. Teachers can also explain topics in a way that allows all students to understand it since people learn things in different ways. For example, auditory and visual learners benefit from online classes more than students who prefer hands-on experiences. Schools also have enough funding to be able to provide outside-of-class learning such as field trips to museums and inviting guest speakers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+57afe97864c9,53B21C3A440F,"However, online classes can benefit students who have a busy life, are in need of credits, or decide that they want to take classes that interest them ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+84e9ba116094,53B21C3A440F,"Those types of classes allow students who need one or two more credits to graduate when they are supposed to rather than stay another year in school due to a few credits. For example, in IB schools, required classes, like a language class, may be taken online if the student's schedule does not allow them to fulfill that requirement since it is full. It is also possible for students to take online classes in the summer in order to make space on their schedule for next school year so that they can take classes that are intriguing to them. There are students who need to provide for their families at a young age but still want a high school diploma. Students who have jobs can take online classes with flexible times, so they can easily fit them into their daily life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+594ee608d021,53B21C3A440F,"In conclusion, online classes do not benefit students since they do not develop social skills and allow for them to learn how to compromise effectively with others which is essential in the workplace. Materials such as laptops, books, and expert information is not easily accessible to a student that is learning online and is possibly going to cost money for them to obtain it. On the other hand, students who have to work in order to support their families benefit more from online learning. Students who only need a few credits to graduate or would like to be able to take non-required courses during school would benefit as well. Better technology has allowed students to be able to have the option of taking online classes, regardless of their personal obstacles, and promotes the importance of having a good education to all young adults.          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a538cb101713,541CC72DE4AE,"Is the Electoral College fair and right? This system is composed of the selection of the electors, the meeting of electors, and the counting of congress ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3dcebda99ae6,541CC72DE4AE,"This systen includes various methods like the ""winner take all"" system that gives the presidency to the winning candinate of the eletors votes ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bb434d0a2196,541CC72DE4AE,"One very important thing in this system is trust, you have to trust the electors that you voted for to make the right choice ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d16968cc61e7,541CC72DE4AE,"This system of eletor votes is very useful for picking the country's leaders. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+025b75804fea,541CC72DE4AE,"The electoral votes decide who wil get what, who will win. Popular vote in no longer in ""session"" or popular, the electoral votes decide it now. For example, in the 2000 election, when Gore had a lot more popular votes than Bush, but Gore had less electoral votes, it was a shocking suprise for the nation, it seemed to be like more people liked Gore than Bush. One very important thing to consider is ... the reason why Bush won, there is a huge diffrence between making a good choice, aka Gore, and and making the right choice, aka Bush ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c5643c790cb2,541CC72DE4AE,"Trust, its possibliy one of the most hard things to do in life, but in this system its necessary. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9aec5573ed3c,541CC72DE4AE,"Its very significant that you put your trust in the slate of people's hands that you and a whole variety of woried people selected. Trust should not just be handed oveer like anything, its should be earned just like respect, vote in the candinate that you trust. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fb1462fc3651,541CC72DE4AE,Popular vote is kind of fair in a way because we can all vote like independent citizens. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8585eb57d4eb,541CC72DE4AE,"Sometimes the electoral candinates vote against the people that elected for them and go for what they think is right which in no case is incorrect but a hudreds of citizens were counting on them to make their choice. We all have a voice, we have to use it in the fair way, and the righthous way is mostly a popular vote ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a894fa2bce4f,541CC72DE4AE,popular vote is not as efficent as eletoral votes. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5b8076794049,541CC72DE4AE,"The Electoral College is right but not fair, althought it has its benifets, its has its defaults as well ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c1c2e7049f30,542FD18E9ADA,"There has been some conterversy between whether we should keep the Electoral College or changing the election to popular vote for the president. There are pros and cons to each method of voting. The Electoral College has been around since the beginning of our country. Most of the time it is successful (there have been a few times problems have occured but rarely it happens). As time has passed and we enter a more modern age, people have started to feel that the Electoral College does not work and we should all switch to just a regular popular vote. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bd0d333b2288,542FD18E9ADA,"However, even though there have been a few problems in the past about this system, the Electoral College is still the best method of voting. ",Position,Effective,,,
+e8d9b18e426e,542FD18E9ADA,It is hard to argue that there are some problems with the Electoral College. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+695a957e2cc8,542FD18E9ADA,"""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" (Bradford Plumer). The public is starting to not like that their vote is not directly going toward the presidential vote but towards a group of electors that decide the fate of the presidency. ""the Electoral College method is not emocratic in a modern sense."" (Richard A Posner). The public is also starting to feel that this is not a true Democracy with this system. ""Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people."" (Bradford Plumer). The public is starting to not like that feeling that the electors can just turn on the public and not vote for what some people want (and it has happened a few times in the past). ""'faithless' electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please."" (Bradford Plumer). That is another worry of the public, no matter what party the elector belongs to, they can vote for anyone they want. ""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the elcetion would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.""(Bradford Plumer). The people are also not liking the fact that an elector representing a small amount of people has as much to say as an elector representing millions of people. All and all, it is hard to deny that there are a few problems with the electoral college and that this causes the public to worry come election time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a309f32252d6,542FD18E9ADA,"However, despite the worries and concerns that some people may have, the Electoral College is still the best method for voting. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e3c3dfa78afb,542FD18E9ADA,"""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote."" (the Office of the Federal Register). People must remember that this system is a compromise for the election and that any change could lead to problems among the government again. The public must also remember that ""each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee"".(Richard A. Posner). This system also can often prevent disputes. ""A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible...but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share or the popular vote."" (Richard A. Posner). Along with the fewer disputes, it also creates standards for the candidate. "" The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal...This is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president."" (Richard A. Posner). Another benefit to this system is that it causes voters to pay closer attention to the election. ""Voter in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign."" (Richard A. Posner). Along with the more aware voters, the Electoral College is also very beneficial to the big states. ""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution."" (Richard A. Posner). And lastly, the Electoral Collee helps avoid run-off elections. ""There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner."" (Richard A. Posner). To sum it all up, there are many benefits to the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+16061b33b5ff,542FD18E9ADA,"All and all, the Electoral College is the best way for voting. With this system, there are many benefits to the election process that people may not realize. With benefits like it avoids run-off elections and it makes the voters more aware, some people still beleive that a popular vote is still the best way. It is important to remember that there is a reason that we have certain methods, to benefit our country. And that is what the Electoral College is, a benefit to our country. So senator, and based on the evidence given, it is important to keep the Electoral College for all the benefits it brings and for the sake of our great nation that we live in.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+258233093613,5445F0F5D9ED,With this new process in voting for the president called electoral college it would be a new start to voting history.''The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast''. This would mean no candidates wins with more votes. With this new method of voting it can be critisized about selecting a president who cannot run this country. Both candidates running for president has either his or her own team of electors who all have there own unique job as a party. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7470a6c77839,5445F0F5D9ED,"But with this system it can cause problems with bugs, viruses, and etc. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+700021182e5f,5445F0F5D9ED,"People often ask whats wrong with the electoral college? ''Under the electoral college system,voters vote not for the president,but for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president'' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb0055710d2e,5445F0F5D9ED,The new voting system is not fair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6e3b84b07eb,5445F0F5D9ED,"Because of the winner takes all in each state. ''Its official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly asserrtions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at times at best. Its hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the elctoral college!''. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cbe740ac917,5445F0F5D9ED,Dispite the electoral college method voting is still possible. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+724cd5e2207f,5445F0F5D9ED,The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College is because it eceeds the presidents votes. Most states have a winner take all method to figure out who represents your state. It would work but it would be very different then our old presidentual voting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e4cf0eb487c7,5445F0F5D9ED,"So with the electoral college method, i think it should be abolished. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e0ab92a92508,5445F0F5D9ED,we dont need a change in our voting system and to have more than one president.''It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidatewho cannot run a state''. So oters can expresss a political preference rather than people a candidate who lost a election by a single vote. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1ff48ceb4476,545505504662,"I think that doing community service is a good thing and every one should do it, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e6706ff4a868,545505504662,know i can get friends and people to help out to keep are community clean ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd9b0286eb71,545505504662,"So we don't hurt our planet, animals, and other things like our population . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0abe2d62db8a,545505504662,People all over the world should do community service ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8adc4623e4e5,545505504662,"what would happen our fish die because some of us don't pick up after ourselves and the population goes down in poler bears, pelicans, and all sorts of nice loving veracious animals; because we don't make sure our rode' s, rivers, lakes, animals die so i' m saying everyone should pitch in at one time like on weekends or everyday so we don't loose a whole population because of it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+327a7d343735,545505504662,"if people like bullies and rude and discourteous people don't help then they should have the right to choose or decide what they want to weather its to help or to not help, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+738bb70fa650,545505504662,but remember if they don't or if they do they do its not our choice if they want to live in a bad or good community their the ones that want to be dirty and disgusting people not us. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+07a8471bbafc,545505504662,"So I'm saying yes you should require all students to pitch in and help keep our community clean, and who would want to live in a dirty or unclean place..... not me ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a54b4ade368a,5473EA33D5D4,The Electorial College should be abbolished. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3bb116cf8049,5473EA33D5D4,"Paragraph nine of The Indefensible Electoral Collede by Bradford Plumer states all the reasoning you would need.""According to the Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks yo the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ac05e893460,5473EA33D5D4,The Electoral College is not fair and we do not like it. we should have the right to have our oppinion out there and not tweaked around by people we dont even know. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ceb5846a6c68,5473EA33D5D4,"Why you ask do i feel this way? Well my answer would be in paragraph ten of Bradfords section. ""under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7cf1ada725fb,5473EA33D5D4,"Thats not fair! As an american Citicin i have the right to vote and if my vote is not counted for, well thats just not right. If i do everything im suppose to but yet dont get to voice my opinion whats the point? That is why! 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c617f7bed7f,5473EA33D5D4,"To sum it all up i will give you one final reason why the Electoral College should be abolished. Paragraph 13 of The Indefensible Electoral Cllege. ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ec22d6d0337,5473EA33D5D4,"Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don`t spend time in states they know they have no chnace of winning, focusing only on the tight race in the ""swing"" states."" If i dont even get the chance to see who im voting for why should i even vote? If my opinion dosen`t even matter why should I care? The Electoral College is irrational. It`s unfair, outdated, and it needs to be brought to an end. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff4af7f2634c,5473EA33D5D4,"We are all equal through our freedon, tharefore we should be treated that way in every way. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7b2953816948,54A8F5B2420A,"Most students who attend a school would say that waking up early and getting ready is school's biggest problem. Some may say that the students themselves are the problem. They would do anything to change school so that it follows their rules, and online schooling would seem like a great idea to them. In the end, they must respect the importance and value of school over these beliefs. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4ff5fbc03fd1,54A8F5B2420A,"Attending classes from home relieves school of its contributions to an individual, reminding us that the authenticity of a school institution cannot be replaced. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+9fd83a548252,54A8F5B2420A,"Schooling through the internet, especially from home, can cause students to lack essential life skills. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+27a6cc954b84,54A8F5B2420A,"An example of an essential life skill would be communication. If a student is always talking to a professor from their home, they begin to lose their social skills needed to effectively communicate with new and ordinary people outside of home. This can cause awkward, short, and even meaningless conversations in the real world. Stemming from this, finding and making new friends becomes an issue that may take a long time to resolve. Workplace skills are also extremely important skills one can lack when attending classes from home. An educational institution progressively trains students with these skills, for they are necessary in order to succeed in performing well or getting a job. Having situations where these abilities are useful are mainly in the form of doing certain assignments with or without others, listening, maintaining eye contact, and being on time. Looking back, online schooling strips one of the ability to develop skills used in the real world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e00113f5a691,54A8F5B2420A,"Secondly, attending school from home by way of technology can be both physically and mentally damaging. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c7262f2bf6f5,54A8F5B2420A,"The idea of looking at a screen for hours on end is a concept that many schools tend to walk away from because it is not good for your eyes. While looking at a screen can be engaging, it is true that it causes major damage to one's eyes, especially if one were to look at a screen in the dark or when they first wake up. After long days of school at home, your eyes can start to irritate and become red, meaning the body may want a break. Online school, however, doesn't give the eyes the rest they need to function at maximum capacity, causing health problems in the long run. The technology needed for online conferencing can also ruin a student's ability to sleep well. Technology can be addicting and can keep students awake for long periods of time without rest. If students are attending online school for a few hours a day, use their phone for another few hours, and potentially engage in any other screen, they can lose sleep. Getting enough sleep for normal schooling is already a problem, so online school may not have the ability to fix that problem. The home is a comfort zone for everybody, but it can lead to a strict mental mindset. It doesn't allow people to grow to their fullest potential because they're at home most of the day, isolated from the rest of the world. One only grows by way of leaving your comfort zone, trying out new things, and going to other places. The mindset it can create can be a problem when moving on to other potentially important parts of life. The physical and mental association this type of schooling can have on a student can be devastating, to say the least. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c3e6b1620c33,54A8F5B2420A,"Lastly, online or video conferences promote the development of bad habits ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cffe5fb4fe4b,54A8F5B2420A,"While schools have students pledge to an honor code, cheating is inevitable in almost very student to step foot in high school. Without the physical supervision of a teacher, cheating can become a staple in one's everyday school life, if it hasn't already. A student can potentially use an online source, secret notes, or another person in the room to help them with their assignments. Cheating is essentially a form of lying as well, which is a reason why it shouldn't be done. A second bad habit that could develop would be procrastination. Procrastination is already seen often with students who go to a regular educational institution, so online education would make matters even worse. Having potentially flexible time frames can cause students to want to postpone doing their work for another time. This can eventually add up to a student having an enormous debt of assignments, waiting to be completed. Following this procrastination, a third bad habit, laziness, develops ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5eb436c74f53,54A8F5B2420A,"Some may say that being at home makes a student feel comfortable and stress-free with their environment, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+994ea419649f,54A8F5B2420A,but that feeling can get out of hand ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cc98065c6f81,54A8F5B2420A,". I used to take online religious classes at home for an hour a day during five days of the week. Personally, I got too comfortable and lazy with my schedule and environment to the point where I eventually stopped taking these classes completely. I would sometimes be too lazy or distracted to get ready for the class. Other times, I would postpone the class to another day as a make-up day. In the end, my laziness and empty will to take these classes ended that schooling. So, developing bad habits is bound to occur when attending classes from home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69151f835634,54A8F5B2420A,"Attending classes from home is a misunderstood way of receiving education. It is not only physically harmful to you but it can also impact the future of your life. There is a reason as to why classrooms have existed for centuries. School institutions are meant to be a safe way of giving a students the traits they need to succeed in life and live life to the fullest. The idea of attending school online takes away almost all of the contributions a classroom can give. In the end, attending school online isn't really a form of school. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ce3feeeb69ee,54AB7FB037B1,"I belive that we should change the way presidents win the election. I dont think it sould be based on what the House of representatives and Senators think. It should be based on popular vote by the citizens. After all, isn't about what the people want. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d549aeadd957,54AB7FB037B1,"It was a compromise between congress and the citizens, formed by the founding fathers. In the Electoral College there are 538 electors. Just over half of the congress has to agree for one, to be elected President. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f6aa18976fe,54AB7FB037B1,"In the end it doesn't matter what the citizens want. Who ever gets more votes in the Electoral College, wins presidency. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aefadf74b685,54AB7FB037B1,"Why do I not agree with the Electoral College? I do not agree with the Electoral College because, for example take Al Gore. He would have on won presidency by citizens popular vote if it hadn't been for the Electoral College. ""Over 60 precent of Americas voting population, would prefer a direct election."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+62fccf8eaed6,54AB7FB037B1,I also belive it isn't fair to smaller states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b630a1de27f,54AB7FB037B1,"Electoral College is based on your states population. You have small states like Alaska and Hawii who only have 3 or 4 electoral votes and other larger states like Texas and Florida who have 29 or 38 Electoral votes. The candidates running for president go to large states more so than small states, because they know that if they persuade the big states the will the election. ""The Electoral College may turn off potentail voters for a canidate who has no hope of carrying their state."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ba57b97791a,54AB7FB037B1,This causing not alot of people to vote in larger states. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3460ed8cea1f,54AB7FB037B1,"Overall the Electoral College is not a good method for electing the Pesident. The Electoral College is unfair, non-useful and outdated. Its sad because everyone who votes, thinks that their one vote matters. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+94375a6ee4ee,54C324EE765F,"I feel the need to eliminate the Electoral College process of voting and just have a regular election where the President with the most votes wins, as simple as that. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+28acae0aab67,54C324EE765F,"Each vote counts as one, and there will be more or less votes depending on the state and its size and population. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c88c1f68e750,54C324EE765F,"Just like Source 2, I feel ""The Electroal College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. "" ""Abolish the electroal college!"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cc2cd249ca3,54C324EE765F,"When you vote, you vote for ""a slate of electors, who in turn elect the President"" (Source 2, Paragraph 2). Why can't it just be a regular election where you either bubble your democrat or republican representative instead of being so complicated and misleading. This can get people confused, and get them to vote for the wrong candidate without them even realizing! ""Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes."" (Source 2, Paragraph 2). In the 2000 campaign, 17 states didn't even get to see the candidates in a campaign ads; they focus on the ""bigger"" and more important swing-states to win. Each person should count as one, and each state should be as important as the other, just varying in the number of voters they had. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1f43675a1a79,54C324EE765F,"In Source 1, it says how ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e337406ef60f,54C324EE765F,"You're electing electors instead of just who you want for President. To top it off, you can't even control who your electors vote for! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+853e2e1c53ad,54C324EE765F,"So people can vote for an elector thinking that he's going to vote for the Republican party but then he votes for the Democratic party. This process can be very misleading. ""Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always."". The disaster factor as mentioned in Source 2 could aways occur. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c504d5f7e3bb,54C324EE765F,"Some counter-arguments might include the certainty of outcome, and how the Electoral Vote might be greater than the Popular Vote. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+369dba2b36f0,54C324EE765F,"But at the end of the day, the people are nominating their president, they don't want others to do it for them. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+56b329d77e51,54C324EE765F,The Popular Vote representing our country as a whole with all individual votes added up should be the deciding factor. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3f7aee20b8a4,54C324EE765F,"A tie is almost impossible in that circumstance also, because what are the chances out of millions of citizens the number would be perfectly split in half. If a president appeals for a region, then  let them vote for who they believe is the better candidate. At the end of the day, the majority wins. Swing states won't have to be a factor without the Electoral College, and big states are just counted them same, one point per vote. Run-off elections won't be necessary if the highest percentage president wins, even if its not majority. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d5f5b96ade8,54CB8D1DFDD0,that we should change the election by popular vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b9d989bc196e,54CB8D1DFDD0,The reason why its better to change the vote because it is easier to vote for the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87154ffc00b7,54CB8D1DFDD0,Back then the the people didn't get treated equal it was the seperate race and that it was by state law. That during the electoral collegeit was unfair to other people but that did change when they change by voteing the president. In 2012 the people voted for obama it was 61.7 of the people who voted for the president and they compared it to rommey votes it was 51.3 that voted for him. its better to vote during the electoral college because the votes is mostly by gae 18 and above to vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+130d2410afaf,54CB8D1DFDD0,the electoral college it stores some of the weight in the political balance in that large state. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c1c65730c943,54CB8D1DFDD0,In electoral college is the method of selecting the president my turn off potential voters for the candidate who has no hpe of carrying their state-democrats in Texas. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3e8d0f463d9,54CB8D1DFDD0,back in 1960 segregationists in louisana legislature nearly secceeded in replacing the democratic electors ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4adc89dd8b5,54CB8D1DFDD0,The most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5100e80d373b,54CB8D1DFDD0,"if the vote is a tie they move it would be thrown to the huse of representatives where the state delegations vote on the president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0686e9e24ea8,54CB8D1DFDD0,"they said electoral college is unfair,outdated,and irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11101e64fec4,550B399B17B3,This world is turning into a darker place. The problem is that people don't care enough. We see homeless people on the side of the street and no one stops there cars. We tend to ignore what is bad. Out of sight out of mind. I think that is ridiculous. We need to help others. If we don't then who will? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+74f6470a2654,550B399B17B3,All student should participate in some form of community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3357ad5ace5a,550B399B17B3,Lucky for us we live in a pretty good town compared to others. In Africa people are starving and here people are dieting. Everything can improve though ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a996d352306a,550B399B17B3,We still have poverty. If we help those around us we will make a ripple affect and can help the world. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+39a0b717b492,550B399B17B3,Another growing problem we have is laziness ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3603cc20162d,550B399B17B3,I'll admit I'm lazy sometimes too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc7eb022a859,550B399B17B3,When students say its a waste of time to help those less fortunate we have a problem. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3d55c17b1ad3,550B399B17B3,You don't need to spend hours but only a minute to help someone out. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+af235a784e91,550B399B17B3,"If someone is so busy with school work and extra curricular activities then they can go online and donate money, even just a dollar. Everyone can help they just need to know how and be motivated. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8450e99b5136,550B399B17B3,"When you help someone else you don't just help them, you help yourself. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a1d3cce6ef1,550B399B17B3,"Helping those less fortunate is a humbling experience. You learn how to be a better person and you want to try harder in life. I once worked at a soup kitchen. I saw kids just like me with parents just like mine and they were starving. I am lucky and I learned just how fortunate I was there. I know that if some of the 'bad' kids went, they would appreciate what they have and be a better student. School isn't just about math and writing its about preparing you for life. An experience like this would defiantly teach you a life lesson. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a215370f3036,550B399B17B3,"Community service helps everyone. We can make a impact in our world by starting with just you and me. We need to motivate people to help, convince them that if they don't no one will. I strongly think that all student should require to perform community service. At least an hour of our time every month. Thank you for your time. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ce495e4f201a,551BD9A8F311,I would like to argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1dcc4a569f53,551BD9A8F311,I believe that having an Elecotral college vote helps the President have a greater chance of becoming elected. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+303fc70ed1be,551BD9A8F311,This process also makes it a fair game of becoming elected for President. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f612ba5f0cf8,551BD9A8F311,It's not only about the President though. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff1d10c2fcca,551BD9A8F311,"As I mentioned before, having and electoral votes makes it fair game for everyone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+75874ddabdae,551BD9A8F311,It states that the Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. This means that the presidential candidate cannot get votes based on the region they are from. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a President. He gains no votes by increasing pluraity in states that he knows he will win. This results with unlikely success of the President. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e6295c73834c,551BD9A8F311,The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b54f7ebf5365,551BD9A8F311,"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. When no candidate wins a majority of the vast cast, it causes complications in the presidential election process. That's when the Electoral College steps in and prodices a clear winner. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b7a42675ee9,551BD9A8F311,"Sure it can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may not be the best way of geting potential voters for a candidate, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ff5b3ab72998,551BD9A8F311,but the way they do things makes it fair game. It keeps the system balanced. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+35d3a9fd42c3,551BD9A8F311,The Electoral College is an established compromise in the Constitution brought on by the Founding Fathers. It's something original that I think should live on instead of being taken away. The Electoral College should stay. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef3be3fb8e1f,5526ABFE6934,The U.S. has been using the Electoral College for a long time ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a8f149511d50,5526ABFE6934,"I believe it would be a good idea to keep it, I mean why would you change something that still works?  Now unless you want to make it a better process it should stay the way it is. ",Position,Effective,,,
+973ca8c9f970,5526ABFE6934,I dont think popular vote would get us a good president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ac8cadde8e3,5526ABFE6934,people would pick the one who makes those promises that will only be good for a short time.  The U.S. needs a president who can asure us we wont have to worry about everybody losing there jobs soon or not being able to pay for gas because its up to $4.00 a gallon. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0acd5f6a4e59,5526ABFE6934,"Its a very time managed process, its not like they take some names, write them on a piece of paper, mix them up in a hat, and grab the first one you feel.  How big of a mistake would that be? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39428a6734fd,5526ABFE6934,Electoral College even sounds like a well thought out idea ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+94c5b404ae5b,5526ABFE6934,for one it has the word college in it and college is where you get a better education for your future.  When electing a President you want to know that you will have a good future with the president that is elected.  Just because the Electoral College is old doesnt mean it isnt a good process. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e10f5c840cd,5526ABFE6934,"Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.  ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cb6cfd260400,5526ABFE6934,"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. ( So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actuallt gone to Kennedy.) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+89309520234e,5526ABFE6934,"Voting for the next President of the United States isn't something you would just want to rest in the hands of popular votes, you could end up with someone who doesnt even know what he is doing, or even desides he can't handle all of the responsibility of being the President.  I feel very strong about my thoughts on the subject and believe that the Electoral College is still the way to go ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e2082c8b5751,552E2FEC5EFA,I think the United States of America should change or abolish the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e8ceb4670129,552E2FEC5EFA,because sometimes it is not actually what the people want. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2970a954450,552E2FEC5EFA,"In the 2000 Election Al Gore won the popular vote meaning more people in the USA wanted him at President than the winner. Should'nt we give the people what they want? A poll states thart over 60% of United States voters want to change or get rid of the Electoral College for this exact reason. The state sends people to represent the State not to represent the people. The state or people in office could totally defy whatever the people want in that state. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f83788f0bd24,552E2FEC5EFA,"Lets say there is a tie. Then every state would have only 1 vote meaning the little state of Delaware would have as much say as the huge state of California. This example is the complete opposite of doing what the people want.This means the 35 million people have as much say as the 500,000 or sol in Delaware. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3269d899f1d5,552E2FEC5EFA,Our government bases off what the people want but the Electoral College dosen't always base off what the people more than what the state wants itself. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3d4ace0d4dcd,552E2FEC5EFA,"Each party representing the state selects the ""trusted"" people for each state ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+339afe4a9d0b,552E2FEC5EFA,What if those people have a change of heart and they decide to change towards something the state dosen't want. (Which is very possible) ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfe015594bce,55362AC14974,"In my favor i do not think that the Electoral College should still be a process. Most people in america are not so pleased with how the Electoral College works. Manily because the Electoral College, in a way, get to pick if they want this person as the president or if they want this other person as the president. The people of America do not really have their own choice. Now, if we would go from having the Electoral College and change to have election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The people in America would be much happier. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f66464546969,55362AC14974,I think that the Electoral College is not fair to American's. We all need to be able to select as who we want as the president of the United States. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e60a531ce267,55362AC14974,"""The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president."" Found in "" What Is The Electoral College?"" by the office of the Federal Register. As you see there are 538 elector. All 538 electors have to conversate about who should be the president. The Ellectoral College has complet control over that. People could want this person, but then here comesnthe Electoral College. The Ellectoral College can change who the people vote for. All of them have to deside what should be the outcome. Its never really the people choice. Its the Electoral College's choice. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2701902aa6cb,55362AC14974,"Americans should be able to chose in which President they want for America. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+52a004a6d73b,55362AC14974,Some people want the Electoral College because they think that they solve all the problems ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+b0ed0fd07b9e,55362AC14974,then there are the people who know their rights and want to be able to have full popularity vote of who their presedent is. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+69ff3344ec45,55362AC14974,"Most of the time te popularity vote is changed by the Electoral College, They chose what they think is so called ""right"". The Electoral College has a mind of its own ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69f37154e9d5,55362AC14974,People dont have their rights with the Electoral College. Thisprocess is not the way things should be. American's need to have or at least know their rights. That is why people in America are not so happy with what the Ellectoral College picks. The total vote for one person chould be 46% and a total vote for another person could be 42%. Ellectoral College has controle over that again. If the electors chose the person with the 42% they can bump up the percentage to be higher than the other one. That is not fair to the people of America. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e5ac44c6feb,55362AC14974,We do not need the Electoral College. The people of America should have full popularity vote of who the peresident of the United States should be.                            ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d615041a652b,5553B03E281F,"With all do respect i dont think having the electoral college is a proper way to nominate a president, or any senate for our country. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f97ca5bdec60,5553B03E281F,i strongly agree that we should have the idea of changing it to election by popularity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c263c989dcf3,5553B03E281F,"to be known as a good person or a good citizen in your state or anywhere you have to be a great rolemodel & an excellent example to our world. From what i discovered in a passage electoral college is unfair.
+
+who are the electors ? and who picks out the electors ? it dependes on the state. voters sometimes vote for there electores but sometimes the voters get confused on who they voted on. somtimes the wrong candiate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b9e6c82b5e8,5553B03E281F,"yes i do think that people who are running for president and senate should have the right to have a chance to become something big, but in my perspective i think that peoiple who is known and well common to there state will be a better outcome to whatever they run for ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+51aeda689dda,5553B03E281F,"its like for an example, we live in the Florida state , we've know a woderful and handsome man that helps around our state and town of plant city,  giving us more and devoring most of his time helping the enviroment and creating a diffrence. The man would have a greater chance of being nomitanted to being a president unlike the other man who only came out of his shell a year ago and have no idea what this man is capable of. Who will we have better trust on? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fbdbb8bf07ce,5553B03E281F,"When you win a contest or a bet we usally get what we accomplished for, when a elector wins , it takes all. well only the electoral collge works up on this. so please state senator, please change the process on how we are voting now, i think it would be alot more acceptable to vote on a preident on popularity. The united sates wants to be in the hands of a trusted person and someone the whole world can look upond.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e3983bd0bb4,558299F3D69E,I think that we shouldn't have to do community service if we don't have to time to do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4acad9974ed,558299F3D69E,Say if we play sports we wouldn't have the time of day to it and if you make us do it on weekends kids might not show up or some might become upset with you. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+078a1cee09fe,558299F3D69E,you should let the kids pick or if they do it give the some extra credit ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7fd4a37d5d65,558299F3D69E,I play sports and I only have time to help on the weekends and sometimes i will be tried and many other kids who play sports might feel the same way as I do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed0eca885fda,558299F3D69E,But if you do pick to make kids do community service I will understand ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d480babdd7e1,558299F3D69E,it helps kids learn to help out other people besides your self and some kids can really learn from just helping a couple of people out. But its up to you there are some positives and negatives with this choice. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1fea481483f,558299F3D69E,I think we should take a vote to see how many kids would like to do community service and who wouldn't. If a lot of kids don't then let the kids who want to go out and help do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64493b3fa70e,558299F3D69E,For the kids who don't maybe they will change their minds if their friends tell them how fun it is because they still are hanging out even if they are helping people out while they are doing it. I wouldn't know which to pick for a while i would ask my friends if they do it to give me some positives and negatives on it. Then i would try it and see if i like it and if i do i will keep going along with this act. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+017a04385354,558299F3D69E,So this is a hard choice for you to pick but i would just go by the vote of your students. Plus maybe a lot of kids will choose to do community service and you wouldn't have to make everyone do it ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+645c6e774584,558299F3D69E,I think i would vote to do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+97338a900d19,55D932D37D19,"With the elctoral college vote most of people are not getting what they prefer. For the the electoral college vote, voters vote fro not the president, but for a not slate of electors. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b910b2da3b6b,55D932D37D19,With the popular vote people are actually getting what they voted for. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89a165786265,55D932D37D19,The best argument against the electoral college is what we might  call the disaster college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c42ac7d8584,55D932D37D19,Consider that state legislatures are techanically responsible for picking electors and that those electors that were voted for couls always defy the will of the people. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec345a7dad92,55D932D37D19,Some mat argue that they like the electoral vote but majority of the people would rather have the popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7decf405eae2,55D932D37D19,It does not make any sense to me how the president with the votes does not win the presidential election. The electoral college is unfair for all voters that vote. When you think of a vote and how it works you would think by the most one with the most votes wins cause that pretty much means that most of the people would rather have the most wins over the win that had less votes but more electoral votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+095f5a5f2a7a,55D932D37D19,The electoral college election consist of the 538 electors. All you have to do is win most of those votes and you win the election. It is pretty unfair for the rest of the people that are votting for presidential election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25dc605cbdc2,55D932D37D19,"The majority of the 270 electoral vots is required to elect the president. When you vote for the president you are also voting for your candidate and the candidate's electors.  Electors are people that are not holding public office. To be elector the state chooses and sometimes state conventions, state party's central committee, and the presidential candidate themsleves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00421681bce9,55D932D37D19,They should not really even call it the presidential election casue when you vote for presidential candidate you are actually voting for slate electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+592e2dabd207,55D932D37D19,Each party selects a slte of electors trusted to vote for the party's nminee and represent them. In 2000 Gore the popular votes which means most people would have rather had him then bush but bush won the electional because the electoral votes. There is really not a reason why the people should vote because either way the electors are choosing the preisdent. The people are showing who they want but really does not matter that much. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd7bcc670598,55D932D37D19,The only reason why people vote for the poplar vote because the if there is tie between the electoral vote it goes to the popularity vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6437fc466242,55D932D37D19,"In conclusion, I think we should change the electoral vote to the popular vote because the majority of the voters should get what they voted. I think it is unfair for all the people that vote and does not really do anything unless there is tie in the electoral vote. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational to all the people.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ca142dced449,563F7AD6C619,"""Do you want to be apart of a Electoral College""
+
+Electoral colleges. Do you know what this means? An electoral college is a process of multiple facts. Not a place. As everyone thinks Electoral College sounds decieving because the word ""college"" in the name but apparentley thats not true. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the President and votes by the people of America. Dear Senator, this is where I begin rambling on and on about how the electoral college is wonderful and great. But I am just going to let you in to alittle bit of knowledge behind the thinking, before you get your fingers in a knot. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+858a9014fced,563F7AD6C619,I propose that we shall keep the Electoral college in order to keep things fair amoung the country. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+beb80e58e4cc,563F7AD6C619,"The Electoral college is all high and mighty and is a process that consists of the selection of the electors. During the meeting of the electors, they discuss the presidents and vice presidents that are trying out for there 'role' in society. They also align the counting of the electoral votes by the Congress men. If you did not know Senator the Electoral College or as we call it ""EC"" consists of 538 electors in the so called 'pole'. A majority of those electors are 270 votes that are required to elect the President. There is one allotment for each member of the House of Representatives adding an extra 2 for your senators, like you! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76c44713f9ed,563F7AD6C619,"As you can see the ""EC"" has alot to offer and your even included. Why would you want to get rid of something that your apart of ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+064ff0553008,563F7AD6C619,Wait a second you don't know the rest of the story do you. Well now I understand why you wouldn't want them to just be another organization. Am I Right? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3fbe4f127f78,563F7AD6C619,"Each canidate running for the high quality name known as ""The Presdident"" in your state has his or hers own group of electors. They are usually chosen by the political party, but the state laws vary from time to time. Fun Fact for Mr. Senator- did you know this is in the 23rd Amendment? Oh silly me your the senator you should know this! Continuing on with our little debate here there is an important part of the Electoral colleges that you must know. Every tuesday after the first monday in November is when these elections occur. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccccb9f8494b,563F7AD6C619,"if you didn't think that the citizens have a say in this at all, well you are mistaken! ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6d20a232c71c,563F7AD6C619,The citizens help choose the your states electors because when you vote for President your actually voting for your canidates electors. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a8e451bfb1b,563F7AD6C619,So they do have a say in this partake. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7e95c3c0abe4,563F7AD6C619,"""Winner Take All"" sound familiar to you. Maybe not but I am going to explain it anyway. The Winner Takes All System awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. Except for the unlucky ones like Maine, and Nebraska they have something called the ""Proportional Representation"". All said and done the ""certificate of Ascertainment"" is introduced after the elction has partaken in. This lists all of the canidates who ran for President in your state choosen along with the names of there ""side kick"" the electors. This shows who will be in your country running for president and elector for the next 4 years until the next election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5b6ca1b467a,563F7AD6C619,"Of course the ""EC"" has some problems ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+70ec00f240e3,563F7AD6C619,"Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and the US Chamber of Commerce want to abolish the ""EC""! They are not alone on this one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29c23524246d,563F7AD6C619,"Under the ""EC"" voters vote for something other than the president but for the slate of electors, who then turn over andelect who ""THEY"" want to be the president. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c92a6820e289,563F7AD6C619,This is why we have the voting we have today so each person can vote on who they want and still be treated the same. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fbfca4317bba,563F7AD6C619,"Allowing the people to vote for whoever they want to is not a good idea. It can lead to bigger problems and issues. Voting for yourself can be very, very stressful. Adding on top of more strees. Of course its easier this way but your electing who is going to be the ""President"". Someone who controlls your country, tells YOU what to do, and makes new laws. It shouldn't be as easy as writting on a piece of paper who you want to be president. There should be some type of way to make it alittle more precise. This is why there is the Electoral College. All you have to do is get with someone you trust and vote for them to be apart of the canidates electors. Then all they have to do is vote for who they want to be president and see what happens. Its just as easy as what we have now but alittle bit more neat/clean. I Know I am spilling alot of information onto you about the ""EC"". And the advantages and disadvantages of having it. But I ask you to read this letter and think about what role YOU play in this election. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4665b8aafd78,5658A5617BA5,I think students should be required to take a position on whether students should be required to perform community service ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+08aab2fc1f22,5658A5617BA5,"they can learn more better education by just being apart of something achieving in life as in doing their school work, getting good grades, being dedicated and representable to the respect in the school policy ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24488c0422f2,5658A5617BA5,i also think students should really take a thoughtful moment about rather the community service activity should or would waste their quality time at home just wasting a lot of time ands not really learning about anything important. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cff39395efba,5658A5617BA5,i think that it is right to establish that all kids should be required in cleaning up all of the junk that has been abandoned our important community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec39e629904d,5658A5617BA5,"i also believe that students should do the right thing and pick up of what they have done as in throwing trash on the ground and thinking it is cool, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+88ec6673c2e7,5658A5617BA5,i don't believe deep down inside that kids and adults should trash and liter up our community like this. and i truly possibly think that kids should think about keeping our environment clean and be supportive. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b51769a589c,5662D458F65C,I am an 8th grade student at your school. I have heard that u have decided to ask students at our school to write a letter concerning if u think that we should worry about community service. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+eded865267ef,5662D458F65C,I think that YES our school needs to do community services ,Position,Effective,,,
+cfdfdd743e9b,5662D458F65C,Community service helps our environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8183cdf37ed6,5662D458F65C,"Also if u noticed the main word in community service is community. By doing community services you help your community by doing service, by making it better. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0eab3e2cd684,5662D458F65C,"Community service can mean a lot of things like picking up litter, helping people, doing work, tutoring people your also suppose to do everything that would in any way help it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3bd60d0328dc,5662D458F65C,Also by our school doing community service we could be well known around our state by taking these peaceful actions. We might even be on the news or newspaper. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+238fb5ce5090,5662D458F65C,By doing this action we might get sponsors or people might donate money to because we worked so hard by helping it and taking care of it the community might give back. Also I think if we do this more people will want to come to our school to enroll or interview us ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a52ee56c9561,5662D458F65C,"All I am saying to you is that in my opinion we should always help our environment healthy by doing this. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7b0f8e3fc582,5690C4B1DE7E,"As modern technology progresses, more and more of our everyday activities are shifting from manual and on-paper activities to automated online functions. A key example of this in modern society is something as normal as email. In the past, people communicated via letters which had to be mailed to each other, taking weeks to deliver;
+
+however, the modern day email technology allows us to deliver messages to others in seconds. As we progress further and further into the future, more and more of these essential daily activities transfers from manual/ in person contact, to automated and online activities. The next major milestone of this online revolution is to make digital and online education and teaching more wide scale so that every student and school can benefit. Many schools have began to offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2c1e47a3e611,5690C4B1DE7E,Student's will greatly benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1be2dfc39062,5690C4B1DE7E,it allows students who are not comfortable or focused at school to work diligently from an undisturbed and comfortable situation from their homes ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c4b603beac81,5690C4B1DE7E,it allows for more feasible scheduling situations ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97ad3843f14a,5690C4B1DE7E,allows students to be more organized thus resulting in better quality work. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ae1f314d4431,5690C4B1DE7E,Student's will benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it allows students who are not comfortable or focused at school to work diligently from an undisturbed and comfortable situation at their homes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d43e5cf267d6,5690C4B1DE7E,"A person's workplace means so much to their work efficiency and quality. Many people often find this comfortable and safe space within the constraints of their own homes. Working from home brings in a couple essential factors, that a lot of times are hard to find at schools which range from comfort, focus, and familiarity. One basic aspect that is often pointed to when talking about comfort at school versus comfort at home is the amount of noise pollution. While at school, you are often surrounded by twenty five to thirty other students who are all chatting and creating noise pollution in your work environment. However, while working at home, there is rarely any noise pollution because of the vastly lesser amount of people in your work environment. This more focused and comfortable work environment can allow students to strive and gain success rather then be out of concentration and disturbed at a school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a97f9dfcd478,5690C4B1DE7E,Student's will benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it allows students to follow and create a more feasible and flexible schedule. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47542870067a,5690C4B1DE7E,"Many students in high school participate in a variety of after-school activities and hobbies; however, since school takes away so much of the normal student's day including commute to and from school, it is often hard to schedule and plan all these essential activities and hobbies. Personally, I partake in a major robotics and STEM club known as FTC. At FTC we retain extremely knowledgeful information about creating, programming, and experimenting robotic designs which we compete at competitions using. One of my major struggles is balancing school and FTC because I have to go to school for seven to eight hours and then find space for time to commit to FTC as well as finish my studying and homework. Allowing students like myself to attend classes from home through online or video conferences would be extremely beneficial to the way I schedule my everyday activities because digital schooling would cut out essential time-consuming factors such as commute time and block switching thus providing me with more time to dedicate to my hobbies and extra-curricular activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2c8b982c5445,5690C4B1DE7E,Student's will benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it allows students to be much more organized through digital tools and resources. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fd86a3df4fe3,5690C4B1DE7E,"Attending school in person often means you will receive a tremendous amount of hard-copy and paper handouts. However, digital schooling and online schooling often uses digital copies of these handouts and online resources such as Google classroom and Google drive. The various resources allow the everyday student to be exponentially more organized as rather then creating countless physical folders and carrying around hundreds of papers, you can simply have access to everything you need from the touch of your phone screen. Digital education also allows students who have trouble asking their teachers questions in person while in front of many other students to articulate themselves personally to their teachers without being seen by their classmates through several available functions that come available with digital educating. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22546bc36e20,5690C4B1DE7E,"Online education from home and teaching through video conferences and other online tools can greatly advance teaching and education as it allows students to learn in a comfortable environment, allows students to maintain feasible and flexible schedules, and allows students to have a much more organized education. Currently, we are heading in a path were all aspects of our daily life are being digitized and improved through online functions. Our education and learning is only the next aspect to make that leap to the future! ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+acb5b6b8a0d4,5694D233EAF6,"The Electoral College basically serves as a filter for the votes of every individual American citizen. Every single vote that comes from citizens is a vote for somebody else who will be voting for the president, not the candidates themselves ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8b7bb0a335ff,5694D233EAF6,The Electoral College is flawed to the point where the most logical way to vote would be to base presidental elections off of popular votes. ,Position,Effective,,,
+ef7c05dafb89,5694D233EAF6,The Electoral College encourages the presidents who are running for office to avoid campaigning towards states with a smaller amount of electoral voters ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c93b6e3f2ec,5694D233EAF6,"If the president is determined by the most electoral votes, it would make sense that the president would campaign towards larger states with more electoral voters such as California, Texas, and Florida. Why would they spend time trying to appeal to some of the smaller states? This can lead to some states not even seeing the candidate. Infact, during the 2000 election, voters in the 25 largest media markets did not witness any campaign advertising ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fe72289a0a11,5694D233EAF6,The Electoral College's process of voting suppresses the voice of every citizen. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0c6e3ab748db,5694D233EAF6,"The balance between smaller and larger states comes into play here as well. Take Florida for example, a state with 29 total electoral votes. If the mass majority of Florida votes for a certain set of electors, the minority votes for the other ones would not matter at all, as the electors speaking for that certain fraction of the population would not elected. With popular voting, each and every vote would matter towards electing a president. The number of minority votes would directly apply to the outcome of the president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ecbef6a0751f,5694D233EAF6,"The Electoral College and the electors should not be the voice of the country. The voice of the people should be heard, especially when it comes to presidental elections. Popular voting is the most fair and rational method of voting. The Electoral College is best off forgotten as a voting system.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d68c4d6e3d42,569CBA2B3B8F,i'm writing to you about the issues of the electoral voting process. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+527c34d8bef9,569CBA2B3B8F,Im in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States for a couple of reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f08473fe90d,569CBA2B3B8F,"First, I will know who I am voting for instead of thinking I am voting for the person I wanna vote for ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eabe6d6a965f,569CBA2B3B8F,second the votes will be fair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+504e5ae47421,569CBA2B3B8F,"To start off with, If we keep the electoral voting process then we will continue not knowing who we are voting for ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+066469eb4052,569CBA2B3B8F,", The text asked itself a question ""Do citizens sometimes get confused and vote for the wrong canidate?"" And the answer was sometimes this process is to confusing for thed citizens to understand and it is not fair to use we have the right to vote but who are we voting for? What are we voting for? If we don't know who we are voting for then why vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+818a5daf89cb,569CBA2B3B8F,I understand having electors reduces the chance of having a president who can't carry our state ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ffbf9082b746,569CBA2B3B8F,Eventhough the text says is takes away the chance I still think it reduces it I mean look at the Bush family they did a horible job and guess who elected them the electors. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+67d6451b8763,569CBA2B3B8F,"But still we have the right to vote for who we want but thats not the case, The case is that we vote for the the electors to represent our vote. I also dont agree with the winner take all vote because is I vote for someone i want me vote to go to that person not switch over to the other because he or she has the majority of the votes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c553d79e4bdf,569CBA2B3B8F,"For my next statement, I will be addressing the fact of unfairness the winner take all rule is not fair ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+52a2d270b926,569CBA2B3B8F,"the bigger the state the more electoral votes it gets is not for every state should count as a equal amount of votes because its like the little states doesn't get any say in who gets to represent us. ""Do you have a older brother or sister? If you do then you know how it feels to get the remote tooking away from you and not get to watch what you want."" And that is the same case here. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c390e2c052fb,569CBA2B3B8F,So I urgue you senator to help us citizens toi change the way the voting process is set up so we can understand who we are voting for and help us make a fair choice so our vote can stand for something. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+50e895074ba7,56AC4BE71C2F,If weather or not students should or should not attend class from home by online video conferencing ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4e467d9a5d26,56AC4BE71C2F,I think in my opinion students should do that and work from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6bc842e09176,56AC4BE71C2F,for example if one day you are feeling sick but you want to attend school and get all your work done that will be one method ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cbf20317e1d,56AC4BE71C2F,"Another example will be if you are out of town and you still need to get work your done , the perfect way will be doing it online ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+93a53e006bcb,56AC4BE71C2F,"Lets say if I wanna study at home and do my work it will be better I will get my work done , wouldnt be distracting at all and feel much conformable ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12183531b60a,56AC4BE71C2F,in my opinion others might think it is better to go to school. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+96692d021392,56AC4BE71C2F,"I honestly feel much better doing work at home then being school, if you need help or anything just email the teacher. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6a21aaab0297,56AC4BE71C2F,Another example will be getting to do all the work from doing it in bed but yet still doing your work ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25456732fc19,56AC4BE71C2F,In conclusion I say that students should be attending classes from home and it should be an option so they could still get there class work done.                                                       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+464ead2451cc,56CE93447F80,Dear senator I am arguing to you in favor of keeping the Electoral College for the voting process of the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c6e2fc2e152b,56CE93447F80,Why I am in favor in keeping the Electoral College is why should we change something that's already working good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5dd49e00a4a3,56CE93447F80,"The Electoral college system is a system that voters vote not for the president, but for a slate who in turn elect the president. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. Why we should keep it is because we have been using it since 1960 and i dont see why change something that works, is slightly fair, and everybody is happy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c63b80afba06,56CE93447F80,"The electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by delcaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+47b571ff79ff,56CE93447F80,"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the electoral college method is not democractic in a modern sense.... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When tou vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a3d17cc72ea,56CE93447F80,The reason is thatr the winning candidate's share of the electoral college incariably exceeds his shares of the popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b10e1c75440,56CE93447F80,"For example,Obama are likelyeceived 61.7 percent of the electoral vote comparad to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes casr for him and romeney. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4c85f913796,56CE93447F80,The winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates as we saw in 2012s election to focus their campaign efforts on the toss up state. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb5e2555bc82,56CE93447F80,Voters int oss up[ states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign  to really listen to the competting candidatesw knowning that they are going to decide the election they are going to decide the election.    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84df8c931d56,56EE0E1D79CB,I think handling elections by popular votes is a much more resonable way of dealing with election. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e6ffa77dc419,56EE0E1D79CB,"When you send your electors to vote for your state its really them selecting the president that they choose, which could either be the one you wanted or not. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cd2f040f256,56EE0E1D79CB,The other thing about the electorial vote is that who are the electors? who picks them? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f8cfe4deabf,56EE0E1D79CB,Popular vote does not only allow the people to have the president they want but does not cause more viloence and disruption. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10bdb39b3944,56EE0E1D79CB,So you really cant trust if you are going to end up with the right president. Who is picking the electors anyway? Random people are going to vote for our president. Why should we trust them? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a9b7cbed148f,56EE0E1D79CB,"When the poeple dont get what they want they tend to get angry and then it breaks out into vandalisim and a huge hassel. Such as when intergation was allowed, the citizens that were still racists towards the blacks and didnt like the changing of the law they had mobs of people roaming the streets causing disruption and destroying the additude towards the celebration of equality. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4a0fe7f4d0e,56EE0E1D79CB,The whole system of electoral college is messed up ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c246b62bf2a4,56EE0E1D79CB,"because just the the election back in 2012 ""Obama's electorial vote was 61.7 and then the popular vote concluded with a 51.3, that doesnt seem fair no does it? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d0ac16ccc078,56EE0E1D79CB,"So the only realalistic way of the new voting system is by popular vote because its fair, there is less harm, and because we know who's voting for our president. Like i previously stated ""Popular vote does not only allow the people to have the president they want but does not cause more viloence and disruption.""    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e91d2220446a,571BE3159B48,Policy 2 would be better because if you can have cell phones out during school it is distracting you from what you are learning. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+09cd0b32f990,571BE3159B48,"If you had your phone out during lunch you could accidentally drop it and break it. It would be a better chance for someone to steal it. What is the point to call someone during class anyway, they have phones in school to call with. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8052ea2bf9b7,571BE3159B48,They can have phones in school but off in your locker or pocket. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+61e7ced53f2f,571BE3159B48,"School is meant for learning stuff not talking to your friends or texting to them. You can text them or call them after school. Having a cell phone in school and if your texting it takes time from learning from you, so if you have a big test and the teacher went over the stuff with you guys and you were texting and not paying attention you could get a bad grade on the test. But what is the point kids texting anyway in class when they are not apposed to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85bc886bede4,571BE3159B48,I could see if you were after school and you had to call your mom or somebody to pick you up ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+47e0edd70c4a,571BE3159B48,"But what is the point of having your phone out, if you were walking and texting you get walk into somebody and get hurt walking into something like a wall ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8c7edb8895b6,571BE3159B48,If you don't have a cell phone people are going to make fun of you more. It will be a competition to see who has the better phone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f741bcb3514c,5729D5AE055C,Would you want to keep the Electoral College or change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+34b98386dc46,5729D5AE055C,I would want to keep the Electoral College ,Position,Effective,,,
+be068625d4eb,5729D5AE055C,". I would want to keep the Electoral College because it keeps its process organized, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3c0c42fe0d54,5729D5AE055C,it helps people vote ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5591ae50473a,5729D5AE055C,it helps people out ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2f054c7ebc0,5729D5AE055C,"First of all, you should pick the Electoral College because it keeps the process organized ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4e12570c68c,5729D5AE055C,"If you didnt have the Electoral College than you'd probably be confused about a lot of things. You wouldnt know where to go to vote. Also you probably wouldnt know where the section of the electors is. ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. If you didnt have the Electoral College you wouldnt know anything of that, so pick to keep the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b65d113c221b,5729D5AE055C,"Second of all, you should pick to keep the Electoral College because it helps people vote. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ff31c8f65044,5729D5AE055C,"If it wasnt for electors you probably wouldnt be picking a President or none of that because the electors set it all up. The Electoral College tells you where the meeting is to vote. The Electoral College has 538 electors and there has to be a majority of 270 electoral votes to elect a president. So there is no reason not to pick to keep the Electoral College. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9175f3d4dbe,5729D5AE055C,"Third of all, it helps people out. It helps people out by telling them what to do, where to go, and who to vote for ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0718c871bd0,5729D5AE055C,If there wasnt an Electoral College it would be harder to vote. If its in the Constitution that means it will help you. The Founding Fathers put it there for a reason. So if i were you id pick the Electoral Collge i wouldnt pick to change the election by popular votes for the president of the United States. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75da5c343d73,5729D5AE055C,"Last but not least, I think you should pick to keep the Electoral College because it keeps its process organized, it helps people vote, and it helps people out. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+49d77e55b40e,575107B10B0B,"The one word used throughout this whole article ; catastrophic, which is whats best used to describe the electoral college. The United States of America, born and based off of popular soverignty, should be just  that ; decided by the people. The electoral college has only been a hindrance since its arrival, confusing American Citizens left and right, becoming an issue to voters/interested future voters, and disallowing a fair chance of a voters vote to be of importance in their state, and to their country. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8bffd7f49d6c,575107B10B0B,The electoral college should be disbanded and reiterized by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e2f06a4a4fac,575107B10B0B,":it does
+
+NOT
+
+allow for a simple method of voting, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a2fba46e74ed,575107B10B0B,"it does
+
+NOT
+
+allow for every vote, and voice to be heard in the United States presidency election, tarnishing this countrys' right of democracy, causing outrages all over the country. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+edc661f767ab,575107B10B0B,"lets begin with an important factor that the electoral college cannot be trusted on achieving, the fact that every vote counts ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e5c7eb40f793,575107B10B0B,"With over 300 million people now in the United States, under a unified country that promotes and exemplifies democracy, we have not been democratic in the sense that peoples vote doesnt even go to their president, only to another mind that can cast you away as if you were not important. As stated in Par. 7 Source 1 an article by the Office of the Federal Register ""Most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate."" These are the minds that are sometimes chosen at random, or by other factors to represent you, a choice you werent allowed to make. The winner takes all method only takes away from states like Texas and California who know their vote doesnt matter because these people will always agree on democratic or republican, and what is currently used in our society. This damages thousands of voices, thousands of votes that could have matter, but seemingly don't. Just like  how schools have implemented the 'No Child Left Behind' policy, we should transcribe this to leaving no american citizen without a voice, only dependant on what state their in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+80faad09107b,575107B10B0B,"Theories on how a single vote doesn't matter have been given, as stated in Par. 23 Source 3 by Richard A. posner ""Voters in the presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election."", ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+27a2487441ce,575107B10B0B,"who also comes to contradict themselves originally with ""Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43% Percent plurality"". In that instance, that one vote could've made a HUGE difference on our future ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9658414a91d8,575107B10B0B,"On top of that, so many voices in states that arent swing states (States that could go democratic or republican, and aren't fixated on only 1 party) that have been silenced could add up to be a tremendous amount of 'single votes', changing this nations history drastically. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8930b774686e,575107B10B0B,"one thing is known as a world wide factor that applies to almost everything that we do. Simpler, is better. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+034107c08272,575107B10B0B,"If you take your precious time and read all Par. 1-8 in Source 1, what you will gather, is that an extremely over-afflictionated method is used when determining our next president.  Step by step instructions on selecting, choosing, voting, controling, and nevermind the problems it has already caused from the confusion of all these instructions. Something that can be fixed easily by one thing: overriding, fixing, and changing our way to popular vote. This would furthermore simplify our country way of voting, attracting more voters, and overall satisfying many people. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+39ee87cd256e,575107B10B0B,Some have also stated that this is necessary to providing a more organized form of voting ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+485a1db48f2f,575107B10B0B,"Key knowledge that must be analyzed is that: just because a service is organized, does NOT mean its correct. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+28cf3f642470,575107B10B0B,"Referencing to Par. 11 Source 2 Bradford Plumer describes on how ""The American People should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election in a century; the system allows for much worse."" and ""that those elctors could always defy the will of the people."" in Par. 9 ""according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al-Gore-Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency."" Many problems that would not ocurr if our way of voting were to be simplified into popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+145cf0765c62,575107B10B0B,"To summarize, and simplify (what should be done with our voting ways) this letter to you, we should remove the electoral college overall and implement the popular voting, to which our country is based off of. This is the most profound way of fixing the problems that we face: the unsimplicity known as our current voting ways, and the restablishment of our original, and hopefully still true government of Democracy, and Popular Soveriegnty.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b8ee5882540c,5773EED58DF2,I belive the electoral college should be abolished as a process over all. ,Position,Effective,,,
+1f81630c94a5,5773EED58DF2,because it does not benefit the U.S. in anyway ,Claim,Effective,,,
+71ffbf154747,5773EED58DF2,as caused multiple problems in elections over the past years. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0ec9019033d6,5773EED58DF2,The electoral college should not be a part of the U.S. Constitution and it only causes issues while elections are present therefore we as a country should elect by popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6455f205c0a0,5773EED58DF2,The electoral college should be abloshied because it has caused multiple problems over the past years during elections and could continue to cause problems. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0c1055193847,5773EED58DF2,"The electoral college process consists of selecting electors, as you know, but those electors do not always vote for their partie's candidates like they should. This process causes the popular vote to not always guarantee pesidency to a certain candidate even if they have the popular vote. In 2000 Al Gore had won the popular vote but lost presidency because of the electoral college. Not only did one inncident occur but multiple occur because of the electoral college. As stated in paragraph 11 of Bradford Plumer's article, in 1960 segregationists in Louisiana's legislature almost succeeded in replacing Democratic electors with new electors who opposed John F. Kennedy so if Kennedy got the popular vote he wouldnt have got the presidency. Like Bradford Plumer clearly stated ""the electoral college is unfair outdated and irrational."" The electoral college should be abolished so that problems can be eliminated and elections are fair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d640766404f,5773EED58DF2,"The electoral college should not only be abolished, or destroyed, because it causes problems but also because it does not benefit the United States in any way. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4604463f7d4b,5773EED58DF2,"The outdated, unfair system just hurts the U.S. government and the country as a whole, it does not benefit our government or citizens in anyway what so ever. Under the electoral college system voters are voting for a slate of electors who don't always vote for their own party candidate rather than voting for the candidate they want to govern our country. 60% of voters would prefer direct election and popular vote anyway so why not throw out the old worn down process that dosent work and replace it with something the people of this country actually want, popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c6342e2dea33,5773EED58DF2,Some people might say we should keep the electoral college because each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee so nothing can happen ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+457fdf0068fb,5773EED58DF2,"but according to history things can happen such as in the 2000 election. Why keep a process that the majority of the citizens of this country don't want and a process that just causes issues. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+46e1e46ccd0c,5773EED58DF2,"The electoral college is a thing of the past, a has been that almost no one wants around. Popular vote elections would be more fair and will not have mistakes during elections like the huge mistakes the electoral college system has proven to display. The citizens of America want the electoral college gone and popular vote elections should be what the government is aiming for so we do not have mistakes in our elections and so the U.S. can benefit from actually having a working election process.                    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+db13cf6812a8,57807B412545,There are alot reasons to keep our the despised method of choosing the President. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c991eef78fae,57807B412545,"The First reason is because Certainty of Outcome, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e8c1bef7004,57807B412545,"in the text its states that ""The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. Another example from the text is ""Obama, he recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney... because all of the states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08a63e600141,57807B412545,Another reason is that the Electiral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cfcbbb36c94a,57807B412545,"in that case, no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president, a solid regional favorite such as Romney was in the South , has no reason to campaign in those states because of the poor economy and because its not a wealthy state, he wont be able to campaign heavily ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ec4613be75b,57807B412545,So he left with no votes and would have to find his Electoral College votes in a more suitable area. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+34477b38bfca,57807B412545,"In the text its states that ""It is a Desriable result because a candidate with regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7afdef1c3cd,57807B412545,Also the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance the large states by population lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment Senate decreed in the Constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b09451c7586b,57807B412545,"My proof is in the text ""The popular vote was very close in Florida in 2012 nevertheless Obama who won the that vote got 29 electoral votes. A same victory by the same margin in Wynoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes.""So, other things equal, a large state gets more attention compared to a small state. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5eb1b99b9e3b,57807B412545,And Finally the Electoral College avoids the problemof elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e174efbaa46,57807B412545,"For example ""Richard Nixon in '68 and Bill Clinton in '92 both had on 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the in the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dddb38a869ae,57807B412545,In Conclusion I think that the we should keep Electoral Colleges and changing to election by popular voting to vote for a President.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+47d02e7baf45,578F55185BA7,I would try to do better in school so I would be able to play sports. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+9b346f423423,578F55185BA7,"That is why I will do my work so I can play sports to get a scholarship in sports. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d18f0a81089,578F55185BA7,"The reason I like to play sports is to be able to tell my son one day that I played sports when I was in school so he would like to play sports when he gets in the 6 -12 grade. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0de1ad8d2d4e,578F55185BA7,"I try to keep my grades up so I can play sports. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e38ae6bc5a09,578F55185BA7,"When I get a good grade on my test and it is above 76 I am so happy that
+
+I got a good grade on a test.
+
+The reason I try to make good grades so I can go an stay at my friends house that is another reason I try to make good grades.
+
+Another reason I like to keep my grades up is to be able to go to my moms house and that is one of my favorite places to go and stay. The other reasons I like to keep my grades up is so I don't get intruble so I do not have to do so much at the house and not being able to go fishing with my dad and that is another reason I like to get good grades. Another reason I like to get my grades up is so I can get to go to college. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c9187e04c5c0,57B41EC7CB9A,"When ever a president gets elected in the United States of America, the votes that they recieve are from the electoral college process. The electoral college has 538 electors, each state in the United States of America has a certain amount of voters, one state might have more than others. For example, The state of California and Texas have the most votes throughout the whole country. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+13f78000f2c9,57B41EC7CB9A,Some people don't really agree with the electoral college process because they belive that if you vote you are voting for electors of your state that eventually vote for you at the end ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c4d80969699d,57B41EC7CB9A,"For example, if you lived in Texas and you wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. And everyone's question might be ""who are those electors?' The electors can be anyone not holding public office. That's why there's a 60% vote against the electoral college ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1e703947c2a,57B41EC7CB9A,"The electoral college is widely looked at as a person, a non-democratic way of selecting a U.S president that is going to be overruled by saying the canidate who recieves the most popular votes is the winner ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fd17018250c8,57B41EC7CB9A,"It is the electors that elect the presidents, not the people. But each party selects a slate of elector's trusted to vote for the party's nominee, it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral votes doesn't win the popular votes. This happened in 2000, when gore had more popular votes, but yet he had less electoral votes than George Bush. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d8e2bd98ca3e,57B41EC7CB9A,I think the electoral college is a fantastic method of electing the United States of America's president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5832815662c,57B41EC7CB9A,let's say a person older than 18 who is allowed to vote and knows nothing about politics ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b73e169d38be,57B41EC7CB9A,"goes ahead and votes for the presidential canidate that has better hair, or maybe because he's taller, or he has a nice voice, then the next thing you know that the president knows absolutely nothing about the government or politics and votes a president based on their outside characteristics and not by the presidents knowledge or his intelligence or ability of helping the country out. And it's sad because at the end of the day the president that they chose can become so mean, rude,and clueless of what he/ she's doing. So then at the end we the people are stuck with bad leader for example, like Cuba, and north Korea and other harsh leader that are the president or maybe even  country regret having that disrespectful person that they chose just becasue of his characteristics on the outside instead of paying attention to the presidential canidates knowledge ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3958a69b3a30,57B41EC7CB9A,thats why we should still stick with the electoral college method. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aafb156e199d,57B68E9AEF5E,"To start off, the electoral college is a system thats been around for ever but is getting outdated. I think that some people might want a different system while others prefer the same or dont care. For all we know,Bob Dole could be right about abolishing the electoral college. Or maybe it needs a new way of carrying the votes. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+37af458f9103,57B68E9AEF5E,I think we should get a new system as well ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bcf2082a5787,57B68E9AEF5E,"Time has nothing to do with this way of voting, nothing at all. But maybe we should see some changes in the way we elect a president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+837a4377a565,57B68E9AEF5E,60% of people would prefer that a direct election be held. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12bb33a1474c,57B68E9AEF5E,"Others are probably lazy or cant make it if one was held, and thats why they prefer the system were using now. But problems are starting to surface with this, already outdated system. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d56b1a8f7feb,57B68E9AEF5E,The very first problem already is the fact that they vote for the slate of electors and not to vote for just the president. Then the fact that you vote for 1 out of 34 democratic electors. If that one that you chose won the statewise election they would get the plethora of votes that were earned. All this locomotion instead of just voting for the people that you want to lead the whole country. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4a86e626412,57B68E9AEF5E,"If we were to vote for just the president and vice president of the state and whomever else we vote for, less problems would be seen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9d205b30708,57B68E9AEF5E,"More factors are that the state legislatures are basically responsible for choosing the electors. This is a very unfair factor because they choose people who oppose a candidate. If that happens, the popular votes dont transfer to that specific candidate. Also sometimes the electors refuse to vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+141ebbc037d2,57B68E9AEF5E,This system is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system that occurs. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86c4a5068f2e,57B68E9AEF5E,"The electoral college may have been around for a long time, but is getting old. The systems it uses are irrational. Its methods are outdated and bias. There is not much reason for it. We need a new system. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b9bf738b2edb,5816C1DCD336,I am not in favor of the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2356d400dcba,5816C1DCD336,because it doesnt allow the peoples vote to be sincere ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f601f7a71f9b,5816C1DCD336,"""we the people"" is what our country is based off of and by having the electoral colloge set in place we cannot be the people. We are endowed certain rights and freedoms by the government and getting a vote is one of them but with this electoral college propaganda we cannot not give our sincere vote that counts. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40cd3d166ff3,5816C1DCD336,this system of voting is unethical and not right. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1be4a34da113,5816C1DCD336,For example barrack obama should not have won and wouldnt have won the second time if it werent for this scrub system of voting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7127ab784149,5816C1DCD336,Much like taking this test we are waisting our time. We are endowed by our creator certain unalianable rights that cannot be taken away. There is a lot wrong about our government and elecoral college doesnt strike the surface. It is foolish to think electoral college is the biggest problem america has. Not just america but the world. The world is falling apart and all these hypocritical media people are freaking out over the electoral college. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66e9ab84eae7,5816C1DCD336,"Riches on earth mean nothing. Moth, famine, and thieves destroy here. But riches in heaven is what matters. This country would never even have became independent if it was run by the people who are running it now. First of all this country was founded on God and now the government wont even allow us to have a Christmas party in schools because the word CHRIST is in it. They want us to have a ""holiday"" party instead. they will all see one day. On judgment day. All we can do is pray for them because thats all that can help these distranged men. Love Joy Peace Patience Kindness Goodness Faithfullness Gentleness and Self-control ol ol. Love joy peace patience kindness goodness faithfulness gentleness and self-contol o ol. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+121c4a213ad7,584D358FE757,"While the idea of driverless cars appeals to many, is it really practical for modern day America? Sergey Brin has proposed and imagined this utopian idea. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+56346675520a,584D358FE757,"The creation of these seeming easy cars would actually make everyones life harder, not only on the roads, but in the court rooms as well ",Claim,Effective,,,
+29fea36ed95a,584D358FE757,"These cars would obviously be extremly costly to make, and would put stress on all tax payers if roads were to be remodeled. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6108e8bcbf59,584D358FE757,The idea of driverless cars is impractical and shouldn't be taken seriously. ,Position,Effective,,,
+0058ba6ebbd4,584D358FE757,"There is a quote that states, ""Be careful what you wish for becuase you just might get it."" What this quote boils down to is that as much as one might want something that aesthetically pleases them, it may turn around to be a truly awful mistake. Driverless cars cause more trouble then they are worth. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ea2a209703bb,584D358FE757,"A prime example would be, if a driverless car were to be made, having to switch the roads and the designs of them. Tax payers already pay for the seemingly never ending road repair, let along new roads for cars that arent even a necessity. Many engineers at Berkeley attempted to use magnets in driverless cars that could read in binary code. They discovered there needed to be grotesque and expensive changes to pre existing roads, making the whole ordeal impractical. After realizing that roads were too hard to deal with, money wise, Google tried to make cars that were smarter. With all of the upgrades required to make a smarter car, the cost of the driverless car wouldn't be fathomable. How are people supposed to drive cars when they cost too much to own and take care of? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b763ce228f33,584D358FE757,"Another huge problem with the new cars is whither a human in the ""driver seat"" would be assisting or driving. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+967eb630874f,584D358FE757,"If a car could go forward on its own, but can't drive under certain conditions, how is it really a driverless car? If a person in the car were to fall asleep while being drove by the car, then there were to be an accident that the car couldn't handle, how would the car alert the person it was time to drive. There is a big reason as to why people dont hop out of bed and into a car. The brain needs time to adjust and wake up before attempting a process that can quite legitimately kill people. A single car accident can kill many people. Pretending that driverless cars are a toy isn't an option. People with health problems wouldn't find a driverless cars helpful either. Awareness of people who cant feel vibrations, cannot hear, and cannot see, would all be in danger riding in this type of car. Without being in control of the wheel and acceleration at all times reduces the feeling of needing to be alert in the car, causing more careless accidents that could have been avoided if the car had an alert and ready driver. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+25ec7e901a50,584D358FE757,"If one of these careless accidents were to happen, who would be to blame? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e4e4410bbc6,584D358FE757,"With the idea of driverless cars, sprialing and time consuming court cases come along. When accidents happen, usually the two drivers are taken to court, with the exception of car recall cases. When two driverless get in an accident it leaves the question as to why two, in fact driverless cars, would hit each other. This also brings up the question as to if they are even driverless cars. A driverless car would technically have to be driverless and not need a human assistant to run properly. Thus saying, more car companys are more likely to get sued in the court of law for murder, vehicular manslaughter, and many other charges most car companies don't get hit with using regular cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a8e3be7058fb,584D358FE757,"Another pretty famous quote states, ""If it's not broke, don't fix it."" Today's cars are fully functional and drive almost perfectly on the roads we have now. To switch the great thing that is going on now would be useless. In this economy, America does not have money to throw around. To mass produce driverless cars is and forever will be unconventionally excessive. In order to save time, to save money, and save citizens from dreaded jury duties, driverless cars should remain in the movies. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9817d18badf2,58621C689C7B,I think you should use policy 1. allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times as long as the phones are turned off during class time ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47ce85d5d8f5,58621C689C7B,I thing you should go with this policy because there is no need to take cell phones away. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+079c68c861c0,58621C689C7B,Because almost all people have cell phones and that will mean they cant use it. And I think they should at least be able to use them on there free time as long as they are no bothering anyone and they keep it on vibrate . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9dd658c88d3c,58621C689C7B,But I also belive that no one should use them during class because it will be a bother to every one and they wont be able to get there work done because someone would be sitting in class just texting on there phone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1d4ff77c5b4,58621C689C7B,But if some don't bring phones to school at all then they wont be able to call there parents to pick them up or in case of a emergency. but the students should not be walking around the school talking on there phones just walking into people because there no paying any attention to what they are doing at all. and they should have there phones off during class to like I already said so no one is on there on there phone in the middle of class bothering people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+731c3f7783b6,58621C689C7B,Using policy two is just going way to far ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad7e85ee98be,58621C689C7B,because the only way that I would do that one is if all of the kids in the school get on there phones in the middle of class and just stay on it for the whole time without doing anything else without even paying attention to anyone or anything else. But policy one is more understanding because it is getting phones out of the way while they are working but not while they are on there free time because phones shouldn't bother anyone if its on there free spare time ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e4488dd54208,58621C689C7B,But that is my reasen why i would go with policy one. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+30b9f47f8b32,588CDD2F40C4,"Wouldn't it be great to be able to drive to places without anyone actually driving? I think that would be fantastic! Today, I am going to talk about driverless cars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dbcffad52d0e,588CDD2F40C4,I think that driverless cars should continue to be developed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f7e2fdc5e066,588CDD2F40C4,they would make the world a more productive place ,Claim,Effective,,,
+438da5542097,588CDD2F40C4,the cars are still in development ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2e6eac3b2f19,588CDD2F40C4,they would be cheaper in the long run. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6a587c1848e8,588CDD2F40C4,"First, I will talk about how they would make the world a more productive place ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a51fbb8ce237,588CDD2F40C4,"While we are driving we spend so much time paying attention to the road, but what if didn't have to? We would have that time to do other things, like maybe work on a new great project that could change the world. With driverless cars, taxi drivers wouldn't have a job. That means that they would have to find something else to do. They could become doctors and bring us back to health; They could become officers and protect us from the dangers in the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb456590d297,588CDD2F40C4,"Next, I will talk about how they are still in development. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1237429ca4cd,588CDD2F40C4,"I think that a lot of people are judging driverless cars by the way they are working now. We shouldn't give up on them so soon; Scientific discoveries happen all the time. Someone will find something that completely changes driverless cars for the better. Besides, they already show so much promise. In test drives, these cars could survive more than half a million miles without a crash. Mercedes Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have driverless cars by 2020. Let's wait until then to judge driverless cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1edad9e47401,588CDD2F40C4,"Lastly, I will talk about how they are cheaper. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb106478f9db,588CDD2F40C4,"The driverless cars that Google cofounder Sergey Brin foresees would use half the fuel we use today. Fossil fuels are becoming an issue, but what if we had one less use for them? Without the need for so much fuel that wouldn't be so much of an issue anymore, and we would have more time to plan for whenever the time may be that we run out of fossil fuels. Also, if we perfected the driverless car there will be a lot less crashes. Without so many crashes we wouldn't be paying for repairs as often. We also wouldn't pay for the medical bills and such associated with an automobile accident. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+536cdcff87fa,588CDD2F40C4,"In conclusion, I think that we should keep working on driverless cars. We should keep developing them because, they would increase the world's productivity, they are cheaper in the long run and because they deserve a chance. It would be great to be able to drive somewhere without anyone actually driving. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f3d676ad4ee,58CE20CD7539,I have heard that many students are arguing on whether community service should be done by the students and i just wanted to share my opinions with you to help your decision. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+995146c4671d,58CE20CD7539,"Community service, i believe, is a great way to help people who need assistants and it helps us become better people ",Position,Adequate,,,
+812b9deeccb4,58CE20CD7539,There are many things us as students can do such as ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a9e8d0f478a,58CE20CD7539,"reading to the elderly, babysitting, and picking up litter from the parks or streets ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94341a1e2ade,58CE20CD7539,but also children like to have time to do fun things. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1ea0400f8ab2,58CE20CD7539,"Children always want to have fun by playing with toys, going to a boiling alley, or going to see a movie ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05722dee3ba8,58CE20CD7539,life in my eyes has to have a little responsibility and in what better way than to help other people in community service. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a71de6cb3538,58CE20CD7539,"I, as a student, have always done community service because it makes me feel like i have accomplished something important and because i have helped my community in someway while also having fun. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64c95da7cd29,58CE20CD7539,So my conclusion to you would be that children should be requested to do community service but not so many hours were it takes the away the fun in life. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e404cdade3b1,58DA41AD8D5D,I don't think we should do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a4acf9af5e50,58DA41AD8D5D,it takes up our time to do things that we need to do ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1c618d99c9f1,58DA41AD8D5D,It will take our time when we have a lot of homework to do and we don't get it done. It will also take our time because when we want to go shopping or need to go do something it will take our time. If you want us to tutor elementary school children we would have time taken away from learning at school. We have almost the same school hours like them. So we would take our school time away. If we want to we could ask you more about it. I know that helping the community is good and very important but not to spend all your time on it. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+db2d5aeca5f3,58DA41AD8D5D,"I would do community service but not all my time because i want to spend time with my family, get my homework done, and learn more at my school. I want to do fun thing but yet I want to help my community to be a better place. So i kind of go with helping and having our own time. Not all the time i want to do community service and only where we can get all what we have to do and then go to do community service. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e9dd564ccb38,594169D56D3F,Everyone has their own opinion on whether or not you should keep the Electoral College or if you should change the election to popular votes for the president of the United States. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+809e8e7f6a44,594169D56D3F,My opinion is that you should change the election to the popular votes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+16aa4e4439cd,594169D56D3F,"To begin with, The Electoral College is a process. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+11d62762499a,594169D56D3F,"In the article ""Does the Electoral College work?"" it states that ""the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" The Electoral College process consists of picking the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and the vice president and then the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23cd3be74618,594169D56D3F,The Electoral College has a few things wrong with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6f1e6a67915,594169D56D3F,"In 2000, Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency to George W. Bush because Bush recieved 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266 electoral votes. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now. When voting you don't even get to vote for the president. You vote for a slate of electors. It would be nice to actually be able to vote for who you want to be president. The Electoral College is unfair, outdated and irrational. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7285b55bbc5,594169D56D3F,"Also, If you were to change to the popular vote, it would be fair. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3a8a95e49d30,594169D56D3F,"Everyone would get to put in their opinion on who should be the president of the United States. I think that if everyone was to be able to individually vote for their president, there would be less chaos and arguements about the election and also the new president. But, it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote won't win the national popular vote. But, it is very rare. Some people don't bother voting because of the fact that their vote will have no effect. They have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4016d59c2c64,594169D56D3F,"In conclusions, I think that changing to the popular vote instead of keeping the Electoral College would be the best thing for the united states. Everyones vote will count, it would be fair, and more people would pay attention to the elections and vote. Like Bob Dole said, ""Abolish the Electoral College!"" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+748599e301fe,5942FB27D5C3,The election of a president is a very seriouse thing that could ruin us or improve us we should start to pay attention to Mister State Sentor it could make a future for some people or cause war between people. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e6612f5e5672,5942FB27D5C3,We should change the system were people can vote for there president not there state electors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5b758e5af115,5942FB27D5C3,"Plus, some people don't know this is going on they belive that they are voting for the person to change the state not an candaite of the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+418424c96a9e,5942FB27D5C3,We should not have people who don't know what there doing in congress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac8fd196a09d,5942FB27D5C3,that we don't have segergation in the state. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+696f2eab65af,5942FB27D5C3,"To start off with, we should not have people we don't know there doing in the congress. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+add182e21fa7,5942FB27D5C3,"In source 2 it states that,'' ... that they can be anyone note holding a public office .... some times state convention ,sometimes the state party's centeral commitee, sometimes the presidental canidates themself'', that is very bad that they can just choose anyone off the streets and don't care, this could be bad for the economy the people thee took off the streets they might not even know how to do there job because they were not trained to do such things, and then they have patry's centeral commitee,or the state convention we should have a direct vote not other people who might not be even on our side and want only power. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b15d18bc2d0,5942FB27D5C3,"Next, we dont want segregation in the state ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3ff946e77870,5942FB27D5C3,"it casually states that,'' segregationists in te louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in the replacing the democratic electors with new electors that oppose of a Jhon kenndy'', If that have happened then we would be in chaos everyone would be aginst each other and there will be alot of pain and suffering for the people because of there race,and religous belife we would no longer be a great nation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+127dcd1ddda1,5942FB27D5C3,"To conclude my essay, that we should not have strangers we don't know or don't even hold a office in our conress to be a state ellector that don't know what ther doing that is how we end up with alot of wars or no money and that we don't have segergation in the state that can lead into more problems . I just want to end with a qoute that agree with even if you don't ,''the electoral college is unfair , outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly asserations without much basis to start in reality...''.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+438f21e1a7ae,5976F16FE9D2,"In the 1960's driverless cars seemed more as like a futuristic fantasy rather than reality, but in todays world, they just might be the next big thing. In the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track (Ph. 3). Although this was the first concept of a ""smart car"", the roads would need an unrealistic upgrade that would cost extremely to much. Today however, we have the technology to make real driverless cars. The toll of human error has been evident in the auto-age as more accidents happen every year. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0a2238dd9a10,5976F16FE9D2,"The use of driverless cars, or at least almost driverless cars, will be benificial to the future as less accidents will happen, preventing more casualties. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+f1c381395db2,5976F16FE9D2,"Today, many cars all across America and the world have road assistance and antilock breaks, but this still gives drivers the oppurtunity to make a mistake and cause an accident. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0b023b236f76,5976F16FE9D2,"For example, BMW created a system called "" Traffic Jam Assistant"". The car is capable of handling situations at speeds up to 25 mph. This is not bulletproof though, as the human driver still has to be alert when navigating through construction and accidents. Developers though, are getting closer to having real driverless cars. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90% of the time (Ph.10). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b76c162db6dd,5976F16FE9D2,Technology today makes creations and inventions capable of almost anything. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1db84d8dcd61,5976F16FE9D2,"We have had extreneous experience with sensors and radar, two things that are almost required for a driverless car in the upcoming future, to make one. In the 1980's, more than 30 years ago, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes (Ph. 5). With all of the experience gained, we now can make real driverless cars. Infact, we all ready have. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009 (Ph. 2). Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but roadblocks and problems do lie ahead for a true ""driverless car"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a8de05bd08bb,5976F16FE9D2,"Traffic laws are written with the asssumption that the only safe car has a human driver in contral at all times (Ph. 9). As a result, many states restrict the use of driverless cars on the roads. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd871a11a3f1,5976F16FE9D2,"As driverless cars are a relatively new idea, restrictions will be diminished in due time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aaeca663cdbe,5976F16FE9D2,Opposers of driverless cars have also made the claim that liability will possibly be the dimise of driverless cars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8fbc2fdc626d,5976F16FE9D2,"The discussion of whether or not the human in the seat or the car manufacturer will no doubt be on the minds of lawmakers, but they would quicky come to the conclusion that it would be the driver's fault, since the driver bought the car and knew what he/she was getting into. Manufacturers would also make a liability agreement required in order to driver the car. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8f5dbed62498,5976F16FE9D2,"Although driverless cars will not probably be 100% driverless, the creation of almost driverless cars is not far down in world history. The use of driverless cars, or at least almost driverless, will be beneficial to the future as less accidents will happen, preventing more casualties. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d8f66f47d8d9,5977CABF7057,Driverless cars are becoming more popular in today's society. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c6816c96a163,5977CABF7057,Driverless cars can be very useful to people today. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3418c3fb5318,5977CABF7057,They can help prevent many accidents on the roads today. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7bf136dcdbda,5977CABF7057,They can be used by someone from every age group that is able to drive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42058141a7e3,5977CABF7057,"Young adults, middle aged people, and the elderly can all use the driverless car to help improve the roads in today's society. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a91bdadd5fa,5977CABF7057,"Teen drivers today are distracted when they first begin to drive. With a driverless car, however, teens could possibly get distracted but would not cause an accident. The car could continue driving for them. If the cars could accelerate for the driver, they could also prevent the driver from speeding. This would prevent many young adults who are less experienced on the roads from being pulled over by a police officer and given a ticket. Many parents may also become distracted while driving with young children. Young children need attention from their parents, and while in a car children tend to distract their parents more often usual. When a parent looks away from the road and to the backseat where their child is sitting, even if they are only looking away for a few seconds, they could run into the oncoming lane of traffic or possibly a ditch. With driverless cars, these accidents could be prevented. As long as the parent or teenager has his or her hands on the steering wheel, the car will drive itself. With BMW's ""Traffic Jam Assistant"", the driver would be able to look away from the road and the car would still be able to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Incase of a work zone or accident, the driver would be notified and they would assert their attention back to the road. This ""Traffic Jam Assistant"" would be useful while a mother needed to tend to her child in the back seat or while a teenager talked on the phone to their friend. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5ec8e560587b,5977CABF7057,"Driverless cars could be a huge advance in today's society. Driverless cars are safer than a car driven by a person. They could possibly prevent accidents and many deaths each year. By using a car that could drive itself, you could make today's roads safer and easier to navigate. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a59fc0c6455f,5988A483AC88,"You are about to make a deciding between whether to make your student.
+
+Perform community service . to whatever decision you make you will always have your good and bad reaction. So know whatever you pick people going have a opinion. Now i am going give to difference reason on both sides. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+dda2973bcc41,5988A483AC88,i don't think you make kids do community services for a number of things. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+28fba9d1733e,5988A483AC88,You don't how the family life is out side of school they might be deliver with some problems and they don't have time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bffcb6c2c222,5988A483AC88,Kids should have the right to do community services. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6785b81c8b4e,5988A483AC88,"If they want to do it that's there thing . that what they want to we should force them i know you have the right be they have there own right.
+
+Now if they want to do community service then ha who stopping them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85fc4db7e589,5988A483AC88,But if you do force them they probably learn some thing and when some try new thing they have fun and things like that. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c935bd93a1f6,5991DAD0977F,"What is the point of people voting if they are not really getting a say in who they are really voting for? The Electoral College has a bigger say then the thousands of of people who vote. How can a group of peoples say mean more then thousands of people in the United States. Also, the ""Winner-Take-All"" sytem does not help anymore then the Electoral college does. What is so special about the Electoral College that they get picked specially to make their vote count on who wins or loses the election? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e8b254299497,5991DAD0977F,Their has been many mishappens because of the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0f30a0c0656,5991DAD0977F,"For example, from an excerpt called ""The Idefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong"" says ""The single argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disastor factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worst."" This shows that the electoral college does do damage to the United States because they let a huge crisis happen during the elections. They could have let it get even worst because they allow it to and make it easy to make things worst in certain crisis. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77103eacafd1,5991DAD0977F,I feel like you should give the people more of a say because half of the people that vote problably don't even know that they are not actually voting for the president. They probably vote thinking that they are voting for the president not for the electoral college to see who will end up on the board. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d4e89b9dfa6,5991DAD0977F,The Electoral College is overall unfair to the voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95ce15a324d6,5991DAD0977F,"Voters pay to vote, to what pay the Electoral College to vote and make their say so important it is sad. The reason it is sad is because all kids want to do when their younger is vote because they feel like it symbolizes them growing up and like they get a real say in who the next president is or the senate anything just as longs as they get a say. But truthful their not getting a say in who will be the next senate, treasurer, or president their actually picking the board who will be picking for them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+632cd599f584,5991DAD0977F,Even the People once wanted to abolish the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81ba45a3eaea,5991DAD0977F,"These People were Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO. Turned out their not the only ones according to the exerpt from ""The Indefensible Electoral College: why even the best-laid defenses are wrong."" is sates ""They're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000 taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+239d1461f26c,5991DAD0977F,"It also states that ""This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidancy."" This show how the elections are in a way screwed up because they already in a way know how many votes a certain person is going to get and how many votes the other person is going to get. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b53f6b6ff4e3,5991DAD0977F,They practicly alredy know who is going to win the election before the voting even begins because the board already has it all planned out. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+100e558b3df6,5991DAD0977F,really thier is no need for the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+59b361ed2d61,5991DAD0977F,"all they do is make the competion unfair for the other person going for the election. Also, because they have cause or been a part of problems and mishappens. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0ed3956bced4,5991DAD0977F,"In an article it mentions ""Perhaps moat worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, were staes delegation vote on president."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc879501b8c2,599620A50158,I believe Policy 2 would be a better decision ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d1a73a4eb15d,599620A50158,I think it would be a better decision because then students would not be distracted my phone calls and text messages. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d1fd22c497e,599620A50158,Choosing Policy 2 may also increase a students ability in school. They may test higher and have better grades. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cdd7d6f86bc4,599620A50158,"Also, students can get a better job due to their grades. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+33717508014e,599620A50158,Students may be distracted by phone calls and text messages because they may not turn off their phone or they bring it to school in the first place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b89c99485a89,599620A50158,The students may even have their phone on ring which may distract their fellow class mates or even the teacher. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+495f75bf2f80,599620A50158,Students also may be distracted from their phones when it comes time for learning. If we take phones out completely the students may get better grades and test higher. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e052a70e88ad,599620A50158,"They can even get into a better college than what they would have if they were on their phones all the time. That leads to a good job to support their lives and, if they have a family, their families lives. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e88cc8c1220b,599620A50158,"They may not be aware of this, partly because they may be on their phones, but they can get better jobs if they stay off their phones and on the books. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd4a908bf83f,599620A50158,"They would not only get better jobs but they even can be paid more than what they would have if they wouldn't have gotten better grades. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bfa8486114db,599620A50158,The consequences should be very big for being on a cell phone or let alone bringing a cell phone to school. Students should at least have a detention or even an in school suspension. Students need to know their boundaries and what happens when they cross them. Discipline is a great way to turn students off their cell phones ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+71b8b7efdfd3,599620A50158,"Cell phones are huge distractions in school. They lead to high school drop outs because of their grades and, not to mention, they lead to low income. If we let students use cell phones more in school they may get the thought they can do whatever they want. We need to put a stop to this now so our future generations will be able to support their families. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f866ab5f4359,59981B992996,"My first paragraph is , I think that some schools offer distance learning, for students because if they dont want to attend to school in the morning ; for example they can take that classes online, the classes that they miss the day they are out of the school ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+10c81606439f,59981B992996,Students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1f63adf64cc5,59981B992996,"if they are in High School and if they are in 12 grade , and they need some classes to pass they can take online that classes ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eaf686c517ef,59981B992996,"Because if they dont pass that classes they are going to lose the year in High School , and all the students they are not going to graduated. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66870cb5fc1d,59981B992996,"My second paragraph is , what I think is if schools offer classes online and/or video conferencing , to the students that means that they really want to help students when they dont attent to school ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a15539c4a300,59981B992996,"For instance ; that schools are really good they need to help all students that they need some help , if they offer that classes online is because they want all the students to work hard every single day at home or anywhere, they wanted to work on those classes online , and if you take classes online you can take notes to help you when you have to take a quiz about what you read and what you know. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f05c8136d4c,59981B992996,"If students deside to go school , they can take all the classes that they want to take ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+5d75ffed2efd,59981B992996,"They can take in the school were they went but; if they don't want to take classes online its does't matter what they want to do if they work from home by the way online , they can work in the school if they want or at home if they wanted to work really hard without any reason and if you get good grades on that classes and you understand everything you can pass that classes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05c633a6d932,59981B992996,"That school's give us a oportunity to work on classes online , if we want to work with other's classes that we don't have yet ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8672879da90a,59981B992996,"For example , if you at home don't have any internet , what you can do is if you want classes online you can go to the library and work on those classes there , you are not going to pay nothing if you work on that classes , they give you free that classes that's why the school's give you that option to you and for all the student's if you are a smart student and you study really hard , you can finish that clases in less than a moth but if you study hard every day at home or at school that can help you.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+043b6f043aba,59A565081D48,What I think about community service is something that a lot of people do around the world. In church school the nuns tell the people in church school to do community service do that we help the nuns in everything or we clean the garbage that is thrown in the floor. My friend OTHER_NAME use to do community service when he was still in church school he was dong community service. I never did that when I was in church school ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f755d7d79929,59A565081D48,Some people say is fun cause you meet new people and you learn new things in the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01e5d5846334,59A565081D48,"People that I know still do community service. They say that sometimes they get paid when they do something. you could even do is when there is snow on the ground and nobody have shoveled the snow you should do it . If the person was a old person and they cant do it themselves. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72da959496d4,59A565081D48,We help other people that's something nice you could do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d73e8042a388,59A565081D48,I help a little second grader do his homework but he has problems. When he's writing his hand start to shake a lot now is a year helping him now his hand doesn't shake at all. His parents say that he have learned a lot of things from me and I'm happy that they say that. My mom say to thank god that I got that job now I could buy something with my own money that I need to buy in school or clothes or shoes that I want. That's why when I grow up I wanna be a teacher I'm learning to be a teacher with the little kid. It's fun and you remember everything that you did in elementary school. Sometimes you forget but you remember or the little kid shows me. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99a3dbf3e2ba,59A565081D48,People could even help the old person taking they're grocery to the car. You could do a lot of things for community services. You could wash the dishes for your mom or clean the house. they're a lot of things you could do ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4ee1b46edd5,59A565081D48,"I think that Ms. TEACHER_NAME
+
+should let us have community service ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c3c5554adbda,59A565081D48,People are lazy to do community service. Because they just wanna chill around with they're friends and they don't do they're homework. I do my homework every Friday I don't like doing it Saturdays or Sundays. I always get lazy or I go and chill with my friends. My mom doesn't like me being in the house locked so she lets me go outside and chill with my friends or I go with her to go shopping to the mall or we go to my brother house. I use to like being locked now I don't cause my head starts to hurt I feel like if I was in jail ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd77ef70ff41,59A565081D48,The people that are bored being at home should do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb9967e773be,59A71CF8491A,"When cars where made by humans they put this device that is to have the car be more alarmed to the driver and everyone else that is in the car, but there are still some cars that are very old and don't have the same menufactors that are placed in the old cars that are like 1800s and 1900s. I think that the old cars should be put into some car meuseum or somthing to remind us how the very first engine car ever work without having a carage that has to have a horse to use as wheels even though that was a very very very very very very long time before even engine cars even excisted in time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+98f2d0cbdbea,59A71CF8491A,"i think that we've impoved on the safety of everyone that is driving and that are still learning to drive and trying our hardest to keep people safe from harm but useally that doesn't happen, we would have some difficulties with the cars that we are using today still needs some work to be done with them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a43a75ccd064,59A71CF8491A,I think it's a good idea to put more control on the car and less for the driver that has to drive the car. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0ae398c6342b,59A71CF8491A,"The only reason why we build cars and buses and trains and etc is to make us get to things like a if your running late for something and you need to get there really fast you could take your car and get there as fast as you can so your not offically late and not get fired and have to lose your job cause you were late for work.
+
+That's why we have cars to rely on and not our feet the whole time but most times if we dont want to use our car we can always walk there thats somewhere close and not far to walk like the gas station or the park or anything or if your just to dang ""LAZY"" to even walk that far then you would use a car or if you dont own a car you always use the bus to go where you want to go. It's not that hard to spend a little money on a bus toll to get to where you want to go and really it's not that hard at all but if it's for something really important then ""GO BUY A CAR"" i mean yeah cars are exspenive to even afford one but really if you save money then wouldn't have no problem at all on buying a car that has to fit your needs and get to places that you need to go. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6794200f2ab,59DE92B483E3,Students should not be required to do community service because it's unfair for the students who don't want to clean or pick up trash ,Position,Effective,,,
+3970a39fb581,59DE92B483E3,If students want to volunteer you should let them join in on the action of cleaning up this school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac6cee106aa6,59DE92B483E3,"We shouldn't even have volunteer workers picking up trash off of the school grounds because us students shouldn't litter. Every time a student litters they just make themselves look bad and the school, city, or neighborhood also looks horrible. Even though I don't want students to clean up another persons mess we should stop littering all together. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d021df3182b,59DE92B483E3,First of all we could give a message to every one of the non caring students at school but they just won't listen to an announcement said by a teacher. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3a49294342d2,59DE92B483E3,That is why we must take action into our own hands to give the students at this school of learning an understanding of why we should stop littering. This school is already dirty why make it dirtier than it was before ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2043a795c25,5A4B52D6101D,"Many believe that the ""Face On Mars"" was created by aliens. I believe it is just a natural landform. People believe that is was created by aliens because it ""resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5dd68c01cfc5,5A4B52D6101D,I still don't believe aliens was the cause of this unique landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+45815bf518d6,5A4B52D6101D,"First off, I don't believe in aliens and second, even if they do or did exist how could they create such a creative landform?
+
+If aliens do exist, how would they know what a human looks like? I believe it is just an illusion. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f338f79d1da4,5A4B52D6101D,"Many weird, unique, creative landforms are found around Earth that weren't human made, so just because there is a unique landform on Mars we believe aliens formed the landfrom? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ce48b620d2c,5A4B52D6101D,"I believe scientists and other people this to start rumors or just want everyone to believe people say this to get a rise out of every one else. Also, I think they just want it to be big news, ""Aliens are real and we have evidence!"" or something that will get a rise out of everyone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ad938785c8f,5A4B52D6101D,"""Michael Malin and his Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times better than the original Vikings photos. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fb058ae595a,5A4B52D6101D,"""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landfrom. ""There was no alien monument after all.""
+
+That is some evidence that aliens didn't create this landform and that it is just a natural, very unique and creative, landform ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed283daa9286,5A4B52D6101D,"Natural landforms are everywhere, even different planets. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d16e28bd85b2,5A4B52D6101D,"There are many natural landforms on the moon, but no one says there is aliens living on the moon. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5a868081ba7,5A4B52D6101D,"So, I hope this explains to you that aliens did NOT create this landform, it is a natural landform.
+
+The only difference is is that it is on a different planet instead of Earth. I believe that's why everyone thinks aliens created it. Like I said before, natural landforms are everywhere, they're natural so of course they'll be everywhere. So, don't let some person with no evidence tell you there are aliens on Mars and they it for a fact because someone else said it was true. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+64f0e1c75f49,5A510998E08B,Have you ever wondered why the citizens of a country have the opportunity to voice their opinion in which who they feel should be president. Well i found some information in source 1 that talks about electoral college. Electoral college is not a place but its a process that was found in the constitution as a compromise between election of president by the votes in congress and election oof the president by a popular votes of qualified citizens of the country. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+040d81e2c6ea,5A510998E08B,I think that they shouldn't change to popular vote in the United States because the electoral college is more fair and plus they don't know the outcome of the election of the popular votes of the prsident of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5790375e5c0d,5A510998E08B,I support the electoral college because it allows you to voice your opinions in which who you feel should been president. It's also makes you feel that once you voted that your opinion matters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+36b8884195cf,5A510998E08B,"In source 1 they talk about when the ""Presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday afterthe first Monday in November."" also you help choose youir state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for yor candidate you are actually voting for you candidate's electors.  In source 2 they explain it in more details. ""Under the electoral college system, voters votes not for thre president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" They mean that don't matter if you vote for ""John Kerry"" and he's a Democratic and the number of whoever pledge to Kerry would be added on to his votes. thats why i like the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4481a7f3eada,5A510998E08B,"But one the other hand, there saying that they might change it to the election of the popular votes of the president of the United States. I think they should keep using the electoral college because it actually have better benefits or outcomes because you know who you voted for and from what they told you ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0438ef18dfed,5A510998E08B,"you believe they can make it happen. There's some states that have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18eff92f1b9c,5A510998E08B,But the bad side about the electoral college is that what happens if thr president you like is a republican but you like the democratic senator? Well i dont know what your going to do then because going to be a problem. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+19be9f1b1dd5,5A510998E08B,Electoral college is not a place but its a process that was found in the constitution as a compromise between election of president by the votes in congress and election oof the president by a popular votes of qualified citizens of the country. I think that they shouldn't change to popular vote in the United States because the electoral college is more fair and plus they dont know the outcome of the election of the popular votes of the prsident of the United States.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+63369630c476,5A91E373F462,"I understand your reasoning in wanting us students to do community service, But quiet frankly, we have enough things to do. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3115c9580e0a,5A91E373F462,"know that community service is a good thing to do but we also need to look out for ourselves. We have schoolwork that needs to be completed, extracurricular activities to do, and chores back home that need to be completed, we just wouldn't have enough time! ",Position,Effective,,,
+f19633551acb,5A91E373F462,Our schoolwork is a major priority to us children. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+167c365a4bb8,5A91E373F462,"We need to complete it so that we can understand things so we can grow up to get a good college, and have a good future. Our parents and even you put enough stress on us about these things so why would you go ahead and give us more things to do when we already have a lot of stress on our backs. We have about 7 class a day all which assign at least 30 to 45 minutes of hard core studying and working. Multiply that by 7 and you get about 4 to 5 hours of homework per night. sure that's not every night but when it is its hard. This leads me in another reason why this extra chore is unnecessary. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f673ef118280,5A91E373F462,"Sports! Clubs! we have these thing too you know. and after our 8 hours of school add this on and it almost makes it 12 hours. plus our homework, do you really think that we would have enough tine to waltz out into the wilderness and pick up trash every day for another 2?!!?! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+85e93778bbf4,5A91E373F462,"When someone joins a sports team they make a commitment to do their best and try hard. How hard do you think we could try when we are tired from working every day?? This inst a jail, we have enough stuff to do that can fill up our day. And quiet frankly i don't think that any one would even participate in this even if it was required, it is just to much of a burden on us students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5a3f8d54e90f,5A91E373F462,"We also have to go home and do some choirs, foils some laundry, take a shower, and eat. That to takes up another hour, lets add it up 8 hours at school 2 hours at sports 2 at community service (which is what you want)
+
++
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+1 at home...
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+_____________
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+That's already 13 hours of the day, and who knows, maybe someone had more things to do, like sports out of school, or scouts, or dance. The possibility are endless and adding this could makes someone day could make it torturous. This also leaves us no down time to read, relax, or watch T.V. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db0752d0ff84,5A91E373F462,"do not add anything new to our requirements for school, we have enough stuff to do and we don't need to come to school back to back exhausted from doing sports, chores, work, and school work. It is just unnecessary. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37b2802ce466,5AD3EAC6A195,"When there is snow in the forecast, students and teachers alike eagerly await a call from Generic_Name, the beloved public information officer for Generic_City Public Schools. Cheers are heard across the county when his voice is heard on the phone announcing that school will be closed due to the weather. Both students and teachers embrace the well-needed break, using the time off to catch up on grading, get some much needed sleep, relax, pursue hobbies, or hang out with friends. Continuing the learning process on these days off would lead to stress for unprepared teachers and sleep-deprived students. However, when snow days and other such holidays start to build up, classes may fall behind in the curriculum. This would lead to teachers rushing to cover all the material before the AP test or state-mandated final exam, and students struggling to understand the new material so quickly ",Lead,Effective,,,
+cdeb6d701c44,5AD3EAC6A195,"When this happens, distance learning could be utilized to continue covering the curriculum in a timely fashion. While distance learning has its benefits, it should only be used in extreme circumstances ",Position,Effective,,,
+ad6487cdcfe1,5AD3EAC6A195,"because it does not offer the same environment for learning as a traditional classroom, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9d8a85950c81,5AD3EAC6A195,"undermines the relationships built in schools, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccafdf643390,5AD3EAC6A195,and has a negative effect on students' mental health. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d1fc25d3437,5AD3EAC6A195,"First off, distance learning cannot offer the same level of personalized learning and support that a teacher in a traditional classroom environment can. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f243d7be0802,5AD3EAC6A195,"A teacher who knows their students can better tailor the lessons to them based on their learning styles and needs. For example, a teacher could dedicate more time in class to review logarithmic functions with games or act out
+
+Romeo and Juliet to help the students better understand the concepts. Activities such as these that are beneficial to students are not possible through distance learning, and could harm a student's level of understanding about a topic. Additionally, it is harder for students to get help when they do not understand new material or need clarification through distance learning. Traditionally, students can ask their teachers questions, visit their teachers during their office hours or study hall, or meet with a peer tutor. For distance learning, a student would have to video call or email their teacher, but it is much harder to explain or understand concepts without being able to meet in person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+87492a2c985c,5AD3EAC6A195,"If both are possible options, a traditional classroom offers better education and support for the students; however, in cases where it is not possible to access a school for an extended period of time due to dangerous road conditions or the threat of a novel virus, for example, distance learning is a good alternative to stay on track and finish teaching everything in the curriculum and therefore be prepared for exams. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5b40241776e8,5AD3EAC6A195,"Secondly, distance learning cannot foster student-teacher relationships or student-student relationships like a traditional school can. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+810546a2103f,5AD3EAC6A195,"When students see their teachers everyday or every other day, not only do they learn about the subject matter, but also about each other as people. When students have a good relationship with a teacher, they seek advice from their teachers, ask for teacher recommendations, and talk about their successes and shortcomings both within the subject area and outside of school. The impact of this type of relationship can often be felt long after graduation. In addition, it is also much easier for a student to discuss with or ask questions to someone they feel comfortable around. A teacher that is unknown or only seen through a video conference feels foreign and awkward, making communication and understanding difficult. Then there are relationships between students: close friend groups, couples, study groups, and lab partners, all important parts of high school. Students build relationships that foster discussion and learning, as well as support each other emotionally. Musical ensembles, honor societies, volunteer organizations, sports teams, and student government, among other extracurriculars, would not be possible without physically meeting. Activities like these build close connections by bringing together people who share similar interests and impart specific knowledge outside of the core classes. Overall, collaboration between students teaches vital communication, teamwork, and leadership skills that are necessary regardless of profession and can only be gained through shared experience. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+81b0df24581a,5AD3EAC6A195,"Finally, distance learning does not have the tools that schools do to help students struggling with their mental health. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3cb463439dbd,5AD3EAC6A195,"In schools, there are counselors, coaches, teachers, and friends who can identify if a student is not doing well and get them the help they need. Without interacting in person, it is hard to tell if a student is struggling and in need of help. This type of attention could be the difference between life or death in extreme cases, and should not be overlooked. In fact, more and more schools are placing a greater emphasis on mental illness and stress. Schools often encourage students to engage in de-stressing activities such as yoga, meditation, or sports. Because the focus of distance learning is purely learning, there is no emphasis on the well-being of students, a practice that could lead to detri mental consequences for students in the long-run. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+60c588a3b4b8,5AD3EAC6A195,"With the advent of new technologies, learning from the comfort of one's own home has become more popular. However, it cannot offer as much as a traditional school in terms of education, relationships, and mental health. More importantly, distance learning would rob students (and teachers) of the sheer joy of a snow day and the healing properties that come with one. Therefore, distance learning should be viewed as a last resort for when instruction is too far behind due to having to miss school for a long period of time.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d90b28c7699,5AE4D1E1C5F6,I believe that the election for our president of the United States should be chosen by popular vote and not by some random people we don't know ,Position,Adequate,,,
+24d7f6abf978,5AE4D1E1C5F6,If I wanted to have someone to be in charge of what goes on where I live I would want to have a say on who should be in charge. I think that if a popular vote wasn't the determining factor in whom won the election, then that person didn't really win the election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+04f60a981375,5AE4D1E1C5F6,in the election of 2012 Barack Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Mitt Romney ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18aaa5983726,5AE4D1E1C5F6,the amount of electoral votes should not determine which of the nominees will win the election i should be whomever receives the majority of popular votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15057c60d420,5AE4D1E1C5F6,"in the election of 2000 Al Gore received more individual votes than George W. Bush nationwide, but Bush won the election, he received 271 electoral vote compared to Gore's 266 electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a73d40313286,5AE4D1E1C5F6,There are many people who travel to vote for our president and it would not be fair to them if their votes didn't really matter because someone else made the final decision ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed32502d50aa,5AE4D1E1C5F6,If our president isn't chosen by the citizens of the united states then the person that was chosen by unfair terms and bias choices isn't really the president of the united states, but is truly the president of the men and/or women in the electoral college who chose he or she. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,
+e8d3f7612515,5AE4D1E1C5F6,The president should be chosen fairly by a just and unbiased vote cast by the people of the united states. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3319f097d08f,5AEDBC21EF30,I believe that choosing the president of the United States should be choosen by popular vote and not by the Electoral Collage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7988ee1726c4,5AEDBC21EF30,"I believe this way because I think that the people should have the right to choose who represent their country, not the House of Representatives/Senate. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a0e6c6447f7e,5AEDBC21EF30,"The Electoral College in most cases is unfair to most voters because of the whole ""winner-take-all policy"". ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f233c955bfc4,5AEDBC21EF30,Some states have less electoral votes given to them and that may seem unfair to some. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+02e89dc4097d,5AEDBC21EF30,The Electoral College method is basically electors that elect the president and not the people which I think is completely useless. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e31501037fd9,5AEDBC21EF30,I believe that the best argument should be between the people and not members of the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83c80b32c077,5AEDBC21EF30,"The most worrying part of using the Electoral College to vote for the president and vice president insteded of using the peoples votes is that the elections are just being thrown to the House of Representatives, where the state delegates choose the president and the Senate will choose the vice president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+63c85916a34a,5AEDBC21EF30,"Candidates dont't spend time in states they know will have no chance of winning. they only focus on the tight races in ""swing states"" that are most likely to pay closes attention to the campaign. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3769239321be,5AEDBC21EF30,"The Electoral College puts most of the weight on the large states because of their large populations. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ef78018e198,5AEDBC21EF30,Getting rid of the Electoral College is a better decison for the people so they get a say in how they want their county to be and not how the goverment wants the country to be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86c2c82955f9,5AEDBC21EF30,"If we use the peoples vote we would get more accurate votes and it would be fair for everyone. The Electorlal College is pretty much what the government wants rather than what the people want which is why many citizens have problems with our current president, so if the people could just get a say in who they think should run the country they should. When we vote for a presidential candidate we are actually voting for a slate of electors and not for the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65a75daf54dd,5AEDBC21EF30,Some of the smaller states don't get to see any campaign ads like the larger states do so they are basically putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3485103319d,5AEDBC21EF30,The Electoral College is hurting our county because we are not getting the accurate votes we think we're getting. Citizens are not going to want to vote anymore because of how unfair these campaigns are. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think a single vote may decide an election. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8753dbf33ead,5B1604AE437E,I am in favor of changing the process in which America votes for its president, ,Position,Adequate,,
+b5e88e6e2d59,5B1604AE437E,"currently the when you cast your vote you are acctually voting for your candidate's electors whos votes do not become valid until [they] the electors are voted for by the [you] the people. A few problems with this process is expressed in an artical titled ""
+
+The Indefensible Electoral Colledge"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+186fdab0bd9e,5B1604AE437E,". With useing this process citizens sometimes do not have control over who their electors vote for, also voters may get confused and vote for the wrong candidate. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a27aa9648938,5B1604AE437E,"I can understand why other people may think my claim is wrong, but everyone is entitled to their own opinion, and should also be entitled to their own vote aswell which is why instead of voteing for someone who will vote for our president [
+
+we
+
+] the people should directly vote for our candidates. In the same article""
+
+The Indfensible Electoral Colledge"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5ff74a68f668,5B1604AE437E,"It states ""Back in 1960, segergationists in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replaceing the democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7cc389f948a8,5B1604AE437E,They did this as an attemp to take the popular vote from kennedy. This just shows how much freedom the electors have with your vote.    ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67b4ee132e86,5B225CED16B5,"In recent weeks, news of new, life threatening viruses (such as the Corona virus) has gone up at a rapid rate, causing a large amount of disarray and discomfort within the educational system; between the staff members, the students, and the parents, it seems inevitable that schools will close to keep the students and the staff members as safe as possible. Once they understood the circumstances, parents and students started to have questions; ""how will the students continue getting their education?"", ""what format will it be in?"", and ""how will it be administered?"" The response that most school counties developed for these questions was long distance learning. Distance learning is a new format of teaching where students stay at their homes while completing assignments; but, this method of learning has gotten somewhat controversial. Many teachers argue that distance learning is not effective and that it allows for students to copy, cheat, or flat out be lazy. This is a true judgment, but misled; ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f999c54de4b9,5B225CED16B5,"when distance learning is applied to hard working students, it allows for significantly better results more consecutively, making it way more effective than the current system set in place. The reason for its better performance is because of two aspects: ",Position,Effective,,,
+5ff51c492c08,5B225CED16B5,"number one, it allows for students to learn and practice taking initiative, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+96ddca623333,5B225CED16B5,"number two, its allows for students to learn to identify what their individual work process is, learn to adapt to it, and apply it to the real world. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2ff25dbe5d37,5B225CED16B5,"The controversial part about distance learning is one of its fundamental aspects; the distance. The system of learning that was in actions for decades was based on a word to mouth learning process, where you had to be instructed in multiple different classrooms, on multiple different subjects, by multiple different instructors; it's quite tiresome, I must admit, but the degree of work is not the issue. The issue lies within the ""spoon fed"" mentality that develops in a work space such as this; a work space entirely devoid of any personal initiative. Never mind don't, when adolescents can't take the initiative for things that deeply benefits them, they will inevitably feel as if they are just a hamster running on a wheel, or just another gear in a clock, causing for a lot of procrastination or laziness; the stripping of self initiative develops a feeling of diminished importance in ones self leading to less attentiveness and over all less care for the subjects being learned. Quite frankly, the students that perform the best in school are the ones that are taught from an extracurricular source, whether its from their parents or someone else, about the importance of education, allowing that child to decide for themselves that they want to pursue it wholesomely i e. they took initiative to learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+04e9dfa7c65e,5B225CED16B5,"With distance learning, students can be in the comfort of their own homes and decide for themselves when they feel best to engage in a new topic. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d26f6c1925e8,5B225CED16B5,"Regardless of what educational system is in place, whether traditional learning or distance learning, there will be the students that wont study, will copy their friend's homework, and will cheat on test, its unavoidable; ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8be8e481beaf,5B225CED16B5,"this is still true for distance learning, and with common sense, the side effects of it can be determined quite easily. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+aeedd4defed4,5B225CED16B5,"When given the option to to stay at home to complete school, in opposition to going to school to complete school, nine out of ten students would agree in an instant to stay home. When further asking them their reasoning, the responses your most likely to receive consists of this : ""Im going to go out and chill with my friends"", ""Im going to sleep in everyday"", ""im going to go out shopping"", or flat out ""Im not going to do any work."" The distance aspect of distance learning, when in the hands of people who initially didn't chose to go to school, will be full of procrastination and laziness. There can be measures applied to attempt to weed out the students that are straggling and try to help them develop better work habits, such as retake policies and extra help, but if a student doesn't care for what he or she is being told to work on, inevitably they will figure out a way around that work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b76ebf4fa53,5B225CED16B5,"Work is of key importance to success; with out working, you can't attain a great majority of success. Evidently though, work comes in many different forms and styles, usually deriving from how that person had grown up and been raised; so, a work process that may come as natural to one person, may be foreign to another. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+59cb3c33e1dc,5B225CED16B5,Learning what a person's work process consists of is fundamental to attaining consecutively good results, distance learning allows for students to be able to distinctly figure out what schedules and work patterns works for them. ,Claim,Effective,,
+ebb07083127e,5B225CED16B5,"While still in the traditional educational system, the process of work during that educational period is at the will of the instructor, if the instructor isnt going at a speed you can comfortably retain knowledge, then a lot of information that is being taught will not be remembered; when this process is repeated, it can lead to a development of stress or a numerous slew of issues. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+75814b0f9cca,5B225CED16B5,"In conclusion, if distance learning were to be put into action nationwide, the outcome would be very beneficial. Students that take initiative for themselves will become more prosperous and successful then the ones that don't; even then, the students that don't take the initiative are given the opportunity to learn how to and apply it to their lives. With the ability to stay at home, students can get the time to learn their work habits, adapt, and improve upon them so they can preform to the best of their ability, regardless of what they are tasked with. And yes, Although there are students who are not compelled to complete school, the amount will be greatly reduced because of the encouraging nature of distance learning, which allows for students to take their own initiative in learning something beneficial to them.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f57c8a43b0df,5B23F7961CC0,"Everyone has a role in the community: such as citizens , mayors , senators , or even presidents. These high roles are selected by the citizens within the community. Some people have a technique of who they vote for but everyone follow the same system, the Electoral College. ""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" - souce 1 . The Electoral College gives citizens that meet the criteria a chase to vote. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3c4ad2f766c8,5B23F7961CC0,"The Electoral College is a system use for citizens to pick who they would like to make and force the laws. ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congess.""- Source 1. It's many steps to picking a president. You have to pick candidates and those candidates have their share of electors, which are chosen by a political party under certain qualifications. ""The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are . . . ."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8821aa23efa5,5B23F7961CC0,The Electoral College has many flaws that can happen ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d8cb0623712d,5B23F7961CC0,but is unlikely to happen. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4f18c45bfa9f,5B23F7961CC0,"The citizens really don't vote for the president, they put they trust in an electors hand to choose the right President. ""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed). . .""-Source 3. Its unlikely for the trust to be betrayed but it has happened during the Gore vs. Bush campaign in 2000. The Electoral College, despite its lack of democratic history, have five practical reasons for retaining- Certainty of Outcome, the President chosen becomes everyone president, some states are swing states, some are big states, and they try to avoid run-off elections. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f3a85c4da69,5B23F7961CC0,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8abe9e7b29df,5B23F7961CC0,While others may want to get rid of the Electoral College due to the unfairness it brings ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+77da87d10ff2,5B23F7961CC0,others may feel different and would like to keep it going due to it given the citizens a choice. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0a75a0ad8e0a,5B23F7961CC0,"You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates's electors."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4628ae092cf3,5B23F7961CC0,"""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political prefereance rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. . . ."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d382b4f9906e,5B23F7961CC0,The electoral college should continue to help citizens vote for campaign runners role in the community because it provides the citizens a choice and also a voice. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ee01d264f8f7,5B23F7961CC0,A vote may not change a election but every vote will count and make a difference. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa9122c6c3c5,5B2EAD37D5A8,"Hi, I am My'Ajah i am a scientists at NASA i am here to talk to you about the false claim about a face being on mars. At first i myself thought there was a face on mars me and my team thought it was very cool. And the attention we (NASA) got was tremendous, but we still had to look into it because if the world found out it really was not a face they could call us a fraud and we could lose much money. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3c1c93b90de1,5B2EAD37D5A8,"So, me Henry and many other NASA scientists look into it and we figure out this is not a face ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bab87e3c2501,5B2EAD37D5A8,but if this is not a face what is it? That's what your thiniking right. We had to find out ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7563d64c1a48,5B2EAD37D5A8,"""so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global surveyour flew over Cydonia for the first time,Michael Malin and his (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper then the orginal"". Once we recived the photo from Michael and his team we dug in to see what this really was. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c15ef5cffbbb,5B2EAD37D5A8,After months of research we finally found what it truly is a mesa ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28ad6d85cff5,5B2EAD37D5A8,for those who do not know what a mesa is a mesa is kind of like a landform made by dirt been blown by the wind. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a127d1e9b9ac,5B2EAD37D5A8,"Well ""on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia----Mar Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.""we had to roll the space craft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view"" Said Garvin. ""Malin's team captured and extraordinary photo using the cameras absoulute maximum resolution."" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+beea85e8c9f4,5B2EAD37D5A8,"Many companies and people still belive that it is a face but, finally we have the truth! ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2a5768f138cf,5B38B644790E,"Even though you may believe that keeping the electoral college is a great idea and a benefit to all, its not. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2a810b1fbfcf,5B38B644790E,"Americans votes no longer count when having the electoral college and do not vare for our opinion on whom we believe should become our president, they decide in what they think is bvest for us. ""The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irtrational"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5bf399cebc06,5B38B644790E,Most americns believe that the elcetoral college is unfair and voting has become a waste of their time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cc68b6d23d5,5B38B644790E,and that there is no neeed to vote if their votes no longer count. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+54f94ab00358,5B38B644790E,Our votes do not count and we are no longer in control. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c32160fc171,5B38B644790E,"""Most states have a winner take all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate."" (The Office Of The Florida Register, paragraph 7) Therefore no matter who wants what iif that is what the electoral college decides thats what goes, And many americans are getting tired of doing pointless voiting if it doesnt even matter. ""Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the house selection can hardly be excpected to reflect the will of the people."" (Plumer, paragraph 12) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb31a783ee67,5B38B644790E,"Yes, The electoral college might be voting for what they think is best for us ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c46a2f52ef72,5B38B644790E,"but whats best for us might not be want we want, it might not be what we think is best for us why does are vote no longer count? ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a19450bc7651,5B38B644790E,"""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee - and that trust is rarely betrayed ... [; however,] is is entirely possible that the winner of the elctoral vote will not win the national popular vote"" ( Posner, paragraph 16) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a52b2205ad4f,5B38B644790E,"
+Our votes are just a back up plan and we are not important. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c9e5edcd316,5B38B644790E,"""The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast."" (Posner, paragraph 22) ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d87478b827de,5B38B644790E,If the eclectoral college leads to a tie our votes become the tie braker but that method has never been use so why are we even voting? ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+75df0647a028,5B38B644790E,"It is the electors whyo elect the president, not the people."" (Posner, paragraph 15) Because the electoral college is voting for which ""package"" they think is best they believe that our opinions are unimportant and they know what is best beyond what we believe. ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of elecetors, who in turn elect the president."" (Plumer, paragrph10) Our votes are just a second optiion and is not resonible and fair to each and every american who truly believe that they can make a diffrenece when they truly cant because they are an ""extra."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08f4e6a896ee,5B38B644790E,All in all the electoral college should not be kept. Most americans now believe that we are not important and voting is just a waste of time which is currently true and fighting againt the truth is not going anywhere. Loose electoral college or loose active americans.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b941c7396c42,5B43D8B934CC,"Started with the founding fathers. The Electoral College was founded and swung into the constitution, as a compromise between Congress and the President with a popular and electoral vote. Now that time has evolved and the world has changed. The Electoral College is not in the favor of everyones expectations, it seems like it favors one side more than it favors others. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a3b3924e063c,5B43D8B934CC,"The Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8028b054ce26,5B43D8B934CC,it is an unfair way of choosing the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d38b6462c32,5B43D8B934CC,it is also known as a non-democratic method of having one side favored ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a596d134450,5B43D8B934CC,it can cause catastrophe. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5096eb445c75,5B43D8B934CC,"Intially, the Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote, because it is an unfair way of choosing presidents ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f0df0624f1d5,5B43D8B934CC,"Electoral College has been around for centuries, but now people feel as if the way presidents are being chose to run our country is unfair. The Electoral College is an unfair way of choosing presidents, by it being known as a winner-take-all system. Stated in the passage, ""Candidates don't spend time in the states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the swing states."" The candidates in the ""lame"" states did not even see a single campaign ad. The swing states have a higher chance and more likely to see their campaign ads, because they are the more popular states. The more popular states are ""the most thoughtful votes, and should be the ones to decided the election."" Swing states get campaign ads, they are the ones who are being favored, while there are other states just trying to get a campaign sign, and get their votes recognized. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2dfca7d5e487,5B43D8B934CC,"Also, the Electoral College can be known as a non-democratic method ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63c5cac0b37d,5B43D8B934CC,"When something is non-democratic, it means that it is not in the democrats favor. It is a rap for them, its already set for the Republicans to win. Stated in the passage, ""In a modern sense . . . it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" Democrats may cast in their vote for presidential candiate comes with a group of electors, they see the electoral college as favorable towards the Republican group. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea61dd9175c8,5B43D8B934CC,"Next, the Electoral College should be changed, because it causes catastrophe ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2684ff6781d2,5B43D8B934CC,"When voting for president, it puts the electors in charge. ""Electors can be anyone not holding public office."" One may never know how much the elector is trustworthy, and responsible. Some may not even feel comfortable with leaving the electors in charge of such cases. People feel uneasy, because they do not know what happens behind close doors, they are never certain on who's hands can change things for the benefit of themselves. The citizens and the people may not be comforatbe with such things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+133ad8a679de,5B43D8B934CC,"But, as much as the Electoral College may not seem beneficial and fair to some it can be a good thing also ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e9e28c70f235,5B43D8B934CC,"Stated in the passage ""Election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where delegations vote on the president."" Us people, us as citizens would not even be in charge or have a say so in who runs our country. We would not even have a choice or chance to vote and see who is worthy and most honorable in our eyes to be our president. Some may be lucky on the Representative choices on who the Electors and our Presidents would be, but also some may be dissatisified. The favor will only be in the representaives place. And the odds will be onto us. The Electoral College is not ran by the Representatives. We have a say so. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a04ba05f473f,5B43D8B934CC,"Finally, the Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote, because it is an unfair way of choosing the president, it is also known as a non-democratic method of having one side favored, and it can cause catastrophe. The Electoral College shows a wide range of it either being a good or a bad way on voting.                ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ad7ae6abb9e5,5B4D05042A6B,"Dear State senator , You should keep the electoral college ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f5a364674ee5,5B4D05042A6B,"beacuse For one theres alot of electors like around 538. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Then after the presidental election , your governor prepares a 'Certificate of Ascertainment ' listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c4cf9e606678,5B4D05042A6B,"
+To begin with under the 23rd amendment of the constitution ,""The District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college"" and for that saying , in the  following discussion , the  word state also refers to the district of columbia. Also Each and every candidate that is running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors.""The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party , but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.""
+
+Foremost , under the electoral college system , voters vote not for the persident , but for a slate of electors , who in turn elect the president.""Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the  first place? it depends on the state. Now i understand sometimes at state conventions , Partys , central committee , sometimes the presidental candidates themselves , Also sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate.""The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the electoral college is what we might call the  disaster factor. Its Basically whenever theres a  really good argument thats what its called.
+
+Subconstantquintly , Sometimes most people worry about the prospect of a tie in the elections vote. ""In That case , the election would be thrown to the house of representatives , where state delegations vote on the president."" At the most basic level , the electoral college is unfair to voters. ""because of the winner-take-all system in each state , candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning , focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. Then now its official "" The electoral college is unfair , outdated , and irrational."" The best arguments in favor of it in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+70be2d5f0df2,5B4D05042A6B,"To end with , Thats why you should keep the electoral college because ,  You should keep the electoral college , beacuse For one theres alot of electors like around 538. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Then after the presidental election , your governor prepares a 'Certificate of Ascertainment ' listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.      ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e8f83a623ef0,5B55BC4B128C,"I disagree with the Electoral College and believe we, the voters, should be souly responsible for determining our President. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+64758d1afb38,5B55BC4B128C,The Electoral College is not fair to the citizens of our state ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e76b4cf7b9af,5B55BC4B128C,"When we vote for something, we want our vote to determine our President, not determine who our electors will vote for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d99020c66f1d,5B55BC4B128C,"
+When a member of their party votes, they may not always vote for that particular party's candidate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+38ced1515476,5B55BC4B128C,"For instance, if the Democratic elect for 2016 had an aspect he planned to bring to Washington D.C., that a member of the Democratic party didn't agree with, they should be able to vote for whoever they please. Same goes for the electors, who may swing to the opposite party that particular year. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab677c4fa9b2,5B55BC4B128C,"In the case of a tie, I do however agree that it should then be up to state senators to take into consideration both candidates and go over their key aspects ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e26470e51fe4,5B55BC4B128C,Then they can choice what will be most beneficial to our country and what will in the long run help our great state and country as well. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51e50750625c,5B55BC4B128C,I do not think their should be swing states. I think that the exact votes of the citizens should be counted and go only on that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1a06847c0c9,5B55BC4B128C,"It should not matter the state or region the voter is in. Instead of voters supmitting a ballot at the local voting site, I think the voter should be able to vote online at a local voting center. In the past, voting has got miss-counted and I think that a more accurate means of voting would be to do it online. That way papers cannot get lost and a computer can count vote so human error does not occur. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1984aa166899,5B55BC4B128C,"
+I also highly agree with the statement from paragraph 23 that states, ""It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fde7a5fbb8b,5B55BC4B128C,"This is true with states particularly in the North who are made up of mostly Democratic and the South being mainly Republican. After the decisions made by the current president Obama, I think many Democratics will want to try something different after seeing all that has not been accomplished under Obama as of 2015. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5fbf251c7eea,5B55BC4B128C,"I hope Senator, you will take into consideration my statement. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0775e820c6eb,5BD888B4E549,I would like to thank u for reading this letter. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6368ee30ce4f,5BD888B4E549,"I would personally prefer Policy 1, because if the students are responsible then they should be able to use there phones in free time such as lunch hour. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9690d88813f7,5BD888B4E549,Students should turn cell phones off in any hour of the day in which the are learning. If caught with phone on or still having the same texting conversations as lunch or previous periods then a proper form of punishment should be given. The reasons young adults should be given the choice to bring or not to bring their phones is because they need to know if you make a choice and get in trouble that they need to take the punishment. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+39d237337be5,5BD888B4E549,Policy 2 is an unfair unlike Policy 1 which give us a choice. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ac05e62a0bef,5BD888B4E549,Policy 2 is like taking an agenda from a hard working lawyer or doctor. It is something they need to make through the day just as young adults need their phones. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1a8e368769c9,5BD888B4E549,Us using our phones help us keep in touch with our parents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+101181a27c15,5BD888B4E549,like on game days and you are supposed to ride the bus and your parents need to find you ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e89d07ab2439,5BD888B4E549,"Now the phone usage on the bus is the same policy as the school. They always have those ""NO CELL PHONE USAGE"" signs up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a63bbcb40eeb,5BD888B4E549,I am coming to you with this letter because i believe students should be allowed to bring their phones to school if they are smart with it. I would most certainly choice Policy 1 but this is just a letter to persuade you. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9329b9f697ad,5C2A497012B9,"Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home?
+
+yes and no ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+8b0cc62aef77,5C2A497012B9,"yes, because students who are taking online classes or taking classes at home would be more focused, since there's no distraction like other students or teachers. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac0e808f895e,5C2A497012B9,"No, because it is not very active socially and physically, unlike going to school, interacting with people, and playing sports. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+49a68fdc0dd7,5C2A497012B9,"Also, if the internet's not working then the student would have to skip the class because internet is what loads the videos and is used for face timing with the students ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4163d7fad9f2,5C2A497012B9,"Some students can't learn just by watching a video or taking an online class, they have to actually experience the situation to understand. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60c74be36ba0,5C2A497012B9,But the majority of the students can learn from videos and online classes. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2fb5fd25ba2a,5C2A497012B9,"Since technology is growing, I think in the upcoming future there will be just online classes that you can take and schools will be there but the students will go there only if the internet is down or any other internet problems, that way the students won't miss a single day of class. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bff91f9bd81b,5C44B0B1C2E3,I think is the electoral college is important ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d51c0768cdad,5C44B0B1C2E3,The electoral college is popular ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7d1eeab7d2a,5C44B0B1C2E3,"''Abolishing the electoral college! They're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after al gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency , over 60  porcent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f2891466b99,5C44B0B1C2E3,"the dirent argument in united states '' the single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor'' te united staste have diferent forms the using electoral college sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidares themselves.''the senate would choose the vice-president. the diferent senator's popular did diferences electoral college in parts of the united states. example : ''Nixon, Jimmy carter, bob Dole, the U.S camber of commerce, and the AFL-Cio all.'' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f0bd66fdf534,5C44B0B1C2E3,"One example ''republicans in california. knowing their vote will have no effect , they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaigh than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote.... but of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and in spite of that, about one-half the eligible American population did nvote in (2012)election''. In electoral consist in vote that person going is necessary much candidate for fine electoral college "" the electoral college consts of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59e3dba6e8b0,5C44B0B1C2E3,The electoral collage is ver important in big responsability for status. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d2a9be7f0898,5C44B0B1C2E3,""" After the presidential election, your governor a 'certificate' of scertainment' listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors."" the responsability the electoral college is better status. the candidate is going election and promosion for going electives'' However, maine and Nebraska each have a variation of '' proprotional representation..'' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7d6418fe1d7,5C44B0B1C2E3,"In conclusion, the text electoral college is import for status. The electoral college is big method of selcting that using very good for election in candidate and president and diferent causes no required. In the electoral college requires president and candidates for diferent region. So region have president or candidate that proportion benefic and help for person much through ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3d50657968b0,5C6687B1AA0B,i am one of the students that goes to your school. I wanted to talk to you about the cell phone policy. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6a5480718fe0,5C6687B1AA0B,I think you should go with policy 1. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3363f3921666,5C6687B1AA0B,We would bring cell phones to school but they would be turned off during class and would be only used on lunch periods or free times. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0409bc7ece4c,5C6687B1AA0B,Some people might not follow that policy but it would sure help out a lot. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+286f3857ace0,5C6687B1AA0B,"One of the reasons why i would go with policy 1 is that there could be an emergency somewhere in the school and nobody knows about it and you have a cell phone with you, you could call the office or a teacher. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+501550e21ab0,5C6687B1AA0B,"Or when somebody got hurt real bad and they have no information or number for your parent or guardian, but you have a number of their family members or friends, it would really help. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05119dc56d9a,5C6687B1AA0B,"Even though students have their cell phones out during class and in the hallways. There would be an emergency one day and somebody has a cell phone with them, it helps. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f95dfae79b73,5C66CBD21170,I think that Electoral College is a great and fast way to gather up votes to pick on our new president ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b5529a80c4ca,5C66CBD21170,i think that it has some big issues and the neagtives overcome the positives ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b3f3e57bb30d,5C66CBD21170,"One of the great things Electoral College brings that it is widely regarded as anarchronism with means that the votes wont be ""overruled"" it would acutally be the maguraty of the people voting on the president. If not it would be the elctors who elect the president, not the people. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5be9222775f0,5C66CBD21170,Also the party the people select is highly trusted and rarely betrayed ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+179fa44dcfd0,5C66CBD21170,There have been a lot of cases in the past that go against Electoral College ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+211761dbff33,5C66CBD21170,One of the things that i am against the electoral college is that the voters dont actually vote on the presidental runner up they are actually voting on the state electors that who in turn elect the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+053f93bc07a0,5C66CBD21170,Also most worrying is in the case of a tie in the electrical vote. In that special case the elctection would actually have to go to the House of Representatives which means that state delegations vote on the president and The Senate would choose the vice-president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18204503638,5C66CBD21170,"Basically the Electoral College is unfair to voters cause of the winner takes it all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning so they only focus on the tight ""swing"" states ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bef7b5fb69fe,5C66CBD21170,"Its official in my opinion that the Electoral College  is unfair , outdated , lack of democratic pedigree and irrational. It has lack of reasons in favor. I think we should just get over with this and go old school and get done with all this confusing matter and change to election to popular votes it took more of time but it was more accurate and caused less problems. Amazingly Bob Dole was right: Abolish the Electoral College ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c43d3a92db69,5C7AF7C12082,"To become a lawyer you have to take the LSAT test, at Towson University 35% of the people who took online classes failed the LSAT. To learn about the obstacles and struggle of the real world, you have to go to school. Going to school will be a very hard time but it will prepare you for your life after school ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+82fd85e335c4,5C7AF7C12082,Going to school gives you a lot of benefits ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a2edbc7d576b,5C7AF7C12082,communication skills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bf65876e21d,5C7AF7C12082,will give you relationships with friends and teachers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+214833c21f7d,5C7AF7C12082,Going to school gives you communication skills and relationships that you will need in the future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4534d6f83e47,5C7AF7C12082,"Giannis Antetekumpu, a NBA player from Greece dropped out of high school in Greece and wanted to work. Giannis had a great relationship with one of the teachers, that teacher made Giannis go to school again and play basketball, than he became a MVP in the NBA because of that teacher. At Towson University people 30% of the people who took the LSAT
+
+from studying online failed because there was no communication, and first hand learning. 70% of the people who took the test while attending school passed. This shows that going to school gives you those relationships and communication skills that is needed to be well off in the future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40c7cd43f885,5C7AF7C12082,"Going to school will get you a far in life, and will get you through a lot of the obstacles that you go through. I go through anxiety, because I go to school though being around all these people taught me how to fight the anxiety. Whenever I would feel nervous or intense I know that I can get through it. If I did school at home, I would have never taught my self how to go through that because I would not have that communication and in school life to help me adapt to it. In the show the Fosters,
+
+Aiden homosexual in the show did not go to school for three weeks because he was scared, but when he went to school everyone clapped for him and showed him that he was loved ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6dee282490c8,5C7AF7C12082,"It is amazing because some people do not feel as loved at home, but in school they feel loved. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+65234d9ac9e4,5C7AF7C12082,"When you are in school you feel loved, you gain social skills, and grow relationships. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e0ce89346b36,5C7AF7C12082,Although people say that online school is better so you don't get bullied ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+079ee8b8b97b,5C7AF7C12082,but there should not be bullies in your school in the first place ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d999c65215a3,5C7AF7C12082,"When you are at school you feel loved and meet new people that will help you out through your whole life. Communication skills and relationships is important with whatever you want to do in your life, and will help you through obstacles you will go through. Being in school is very impactful, and has a lot of benefits.                            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+13a0f7e72249,5C8E678EACDD,I think that we should keep the electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c94ab89ed0d0,5C8E678EACDD,It provides winner take all method ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5558b6ab0a3a,5C8E678EACDD,it avoids run-off elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3d957b7b361,5C8E678EACDD,and there is a certainty of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b95241f754b7,5C8E678EACDD,I feel that the electoral college is not anachorism because it belongs in the present to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0e7a6edf78c,5C8E678EACDD,First of all the electoral college should stay because it provides a winner take all method. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ddb8fb1a903d,5C8E678EACDD,The winner take all method is getting a swing state. A swing state is good to win because people in toss up states pay close attention to the election. They actually listen  to the canidtes and what they are speking about. They are known to be the most thoughtful voters on average. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d19c1c83a7a,5C8E678EACDD,Secondly the electoral college should stay because it avoids run off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cde7cbcda2a7,5C8E678EACDD,The electoral college makes sure that no canidate recieves a maajority of the votes cast ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90e56d790316,5C8E678EACDD,If no one wins a majority of the votes cast then it would add pressure to the election because it would greatly complicate the presidential election which is reduced by the electoral college ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71462b2f58a6,5C8E678EACDD,If it wasnt for the electoral college then half of the people like democrats of texas and republicans in california wouldnt vote because their votes dont count. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3e336b51184f,5C8E678EACDD,Third of all the electoral college should stay because it provides a certainty of outcome. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e707d8319b23,5C8E678EACDD,A dispute over an outcome is possible but not certain that you would win. But on the other hand a dispute over the popular vote is more likely to win. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3c7fb35939c8,5C8E678EACDD,The reason for that is that a winning canidates share of electoral votes exceeds his share of popular votes. A tie is possible due to the total number of votes being 538 but it is very unlikely. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eceb7b31ea8f,5C8E678EACDD,"In conclusion I think that the electoral college should stay because it provides a winner take all method, it avoids run off elections, and it provides a certainty of outcome. I hope that the electoral college stays in the election process forever.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12a516196485,5C911C2B4F28,I think every student should be prerequisite to do at least two hours of community services. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b8cf44c126ca,5C911C2B4F28,"Community services is a commendable thing to do because we all are helping out the community by helping little kids such as tutoring or cleaning up your neighborhood for a cleaner earth. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+d9756bf40e63,5C911C2B4F28,Some people might just think community service takes too much time away from what they have to do and is a waste of time ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9498709d8f11,5C911C2B4F28,"But by doing community services each of us is doing something subsidiary. I think if we all do this we can make our community a better place to live in and i assure your that after doing so many good and helpful things toward others, in the end you will feel and be a better person. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+652cfc24c0ec,5C911C2B4F28,"Community services is also good because it is sometimes prerequisite for some high schools and colleges, which will make you look like a better person, being part of the community. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+da16670dcac3,5C911C2B4F28,"Community Services isn't all that bad because at the end of the day, you just got to think back and realize how much you did and how that will make a difference to someone you helped or change something you did. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e28f9811f8ec,5C911C2B4F28,Some types of community services, is volunteering at the hospital helping clean up litter by the road sides or side walk. Even helping out at your church or just going to the nursing home to help. All this and much more will help you serve in the community and be a better person. ,Evidence,Effective,,
+bf1dca3ee854,5C911C2B4F28,"I think if it is imperative for all students to perform community services, that it'll make the school look like a better place and so will the students. This is a way of good form and will be various different type of community services for every different student to choose from every student should at least pick two different types of services to do. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6ae8a05090b0,5C9627F63CB8,Wouldnt you want a car that can drive by itself ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bc47f3895a8a,5C9627F63CB8,"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars had driven more than half a miliion miles without a crash.
+
+In 2013, BMW announced the devolopment of ""Traffic Jam Assistant."" the car can handle driving functions at speeds up tp 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills ,such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situations requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever a problem occurs.
+
+GM has devoloped driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other options under considerartions are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.
+
+Tesla has a projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. In 2020 the cars that would be able to drive by themself are Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc43b126579b,5CB2FF0429F3,"The electoral college is a part of the constitution, it's has been used to decide who will be our president froever as long as the constitution has been on paper. Why get rid of it? Is it because we live in a world where everything is new and improved? Or because it geneuinly does'nt work? Electoral colleges are widely regaurded as an anachronism, and non-democratic method of selecting a president. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4466f5781702,5CB2FF0429F3,So why do we need to cange the way we do things. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+23d7fa8d3d88,5CB2FF0429F3,"What if something tlike the disaster factor happened again and someone voted for someone that wasnt in their party. Or if an election came to a tie what would happen then the election would be thrown to the house of representitives, where the state delegations vote on the president, because each state casts only one vote ,the single representitive from wyoming, represents 500,000 voters. but the electoral college avoide run-off elections meaning no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+74c89e5962bc,5CD698A502C8,It would be best to require students to perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ab07396e660d,5CD698A502C8,They shouldn't think community service is just a waste of time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ae6e179a1a4b,5CD698A502C8,because its not ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+02ad0c13ea29,5CD698A502C8,There is litter everywhere in this town and we need people to pick the litter up. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c9f433ccbfc7,5CD698A502C8,"For example, litter can become a health problem or can affect the environment. if there is too much litter it could be disaster. the environment can be affected the most from litter it can kill plants which mean no oxygen and can kill animals which means no food. people health can also be in jeopardy. if there is too much litter the air can become polluted and people would become ill.
+
+Another example is, nobody would want to live in a polluted place with litter everywhere.
+
+its disgusting and dirty. people can die from litter and there health can be destroyed. Community service is not a waste of time because your helping the environment and hundreds of people life. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f76e9b8e7188,5CD698A502C8,"My conclusion is, community service is not a waste of time. Your helping the environment and people's health. Help pick up litter and stop littering before it to late ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3482c2e81572,5CE073B74680,Is community service for the help of people or to punish the bad by .What they have done in the past of their life . ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+919cd79136c7,5CE073B74680,I think that students should be able to perform community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+382cd7abd5c3,5CE073B74680,But also students should want to help out there community with out there principals requirement ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d085546b212,5CE073B74680,Community service is not always punishment for the bad it can also help you in the long run ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+082b7d4bea7f,5CE073B74680,Service of the community is always for the better of the people and you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e5a79e3ae64,5CE073B74680,Has your principal ever required community service for your school .Well if you were ever in that place .Would you do it or pass it by? Its always a question in mind.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+486d3e71bc80,5CE0E9A7214D,I think you shouldn't put everyone in community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+871d91d42716,5CE0E9A7214D,some of the kids don't need to be in it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd6795d1e48a,5CE0E9A7214D,they didn't any thing bad i think only the bad people should do community service they do something bad they have to make it up for you but like that is up to you i am telling you what is on my mind of people want to help they can help but not all kids should do it ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+116cfcc64180,5CE0E9A7214D,like imagine if we all do it we would be mad at the people who is making us do it no its not you its the bad kids and no wants to mess there day because of them right or wrong well this is what i want to say to you and i hope we don't have to do community service but like if the kids are bad you don't have to put them in community service you cant take stuff away from them . Are they can stay after school and do there homework . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42dd6dd01072,5CE0E9A7214D,well yah i hope you make the best chose .All of the students should have a other chance. If they want to do community service they an help little kids on there homework or clean up at the school or something . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a14fae1e18ac,5D1A08FC3563,The meaning of a democracy is that the people vote for their leader or president. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9a74a2761321,5D1A08FC3563,The electoral college denys that right and that is why the state senator should change that. ,Position,Effective,,,
+997e099f0f93,5D1A08FC3563,"Not only do the popular votes barley make a difference but, with the electoral college in play the representatives vote for our president, not us. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+62d0eee45067,5D1A08FC3563,If popular vote was the way the president was elected the elections would be fair. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+da75c2e0c2c5,5D1A08FC3563,"To start with, how can we live in a democracy were the people do not pick their own president but, some representatives we suposadly chose can. If we were alowed to choose our own president then we could at least feel right in what we chose and not what the representatives did. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c48cca9e02ad,5D1A08FC3563,"according to
+
+Bradford Plumer the electoral college is unfair due to the winner take all method which basically states that if you are a big state and have many representatives then you will have a majority of a say when it comes to voting. I it were only up to the people to vote then every single vote would count more towards the winning president and not towards the representatives. If the electoral college would keep on then even if the popular vote went for one of the representatives the electoral vote would decide the actual winner. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b209e54f433c,5D1A08FC3563,"Also, acorrding to the Office of the Federal Register a total of 270 or more electoral votes are needed to elect a president. The total amount of votes consists of 538 electors, meaning there could be a tie in elections. This implys that the system is not fool proof and can have errors. However, if the popular votes were counted more than the electoral votes there would not be any chance of a tie and a president will always be elected. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f6866d7ebea,5D1A08FC3563,Most Americans do not know that they are voting for representatives who in turn vote for the president making this unfair. Thats just another reason why the electoral college is outdated and not needed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+acfed07c4d5f,5D1A08FC3563,"Although the popular vote system is a little bias and favors the president the citizens like the most, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+89e27cea1898,5D1A08FC3563,"it can also prove more effected for the fact that there will always be a winner no matter what. The popular votes system cant be represented by most states like the electoral college does but, it does have the vote of the entire country as opposed to a few states with more representatives. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c6056bf69714,5D1A08FC3563,"In conclusion, the senator should change the voting system for many reasons. First, the popular vote is more reliable and there will always be a winner. Second, the electoral college has an even number of votes meaning there could be a tie therefore ruining the election. Finally, most people would like to personaly vote for theyre president rather than someone else to do it for you. These simple reason suggest why the senate should change the system.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f5247ab49441,5D20393B5BB9,"I have recently heard that you are reconsidering the schools cell phone policy. While I do respect whatever choice you make in the end, I'd hope that you would consider my thoughts on the issue. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8e4fa67a8eca,5D20393B5BB9,"I believe that children should be allowed to bring their phones to school, therefore I support policy one. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+427487e6d337,5D20393B5BB9,"First of all, many kids our age make decisions during the school day of what they would like to do after school.
+
+Wither it be going to a friend's house of staying after for extra help. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+89688524a7fc,5D20393B5BB9,"Kids need these phones to communicate with their parents while still on school grounds so they don't miss the bus or can't get home.
+
+Also, if children have free time it should be their choice what they do with it.
+
+During free block phones should be allowed because kids might not have any work to do, answer should be able to choose what they do during their ""free"" time. Projects that are done as a group would be easier to complete if cell phone use is permitted. If the kid wants to use their phone to communicate with a person in a different classroom they should be allowed to as long as it is not disruptive to other students.
+
+One way to avoid this is to require all phones to be set on vibrate so that the rings are not disruptive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a7fa6581475,5D20393B5BB9,"Thank you for your consideration, ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fed3ebd0d4ec,5D24FD22556E,I THINK THAT PEOPLE IN THIS SHOULD HELP THE COUNTRY ON DOING THE RIGHT THINGS LIKE DOING RECYCLING. PICKING UP TRASH. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c49a365a746b,5D24FD22556E,CAUSE I THINK THAT STUDENTS SHOULD GET TOGETHER IN HELP OUR SCHOOL BY DOING WORK. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4c997514576b,5D24FD22556E,BEING THE PERSON WHO CLEAN THE COUNTRY BY PICKING THERE TRASH UP IN TAKING THERE TRASH OUT. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13c130c295a4,5D24FD22556E,AND THINK THAT SHOULD NOT DO COMMUNITY SERVICE ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fdfb100299d4,5D24FD22556E,CAUSE THATS TAKING AWAY THE EDUCATIONAL THINGS THEY HAVE TO DO ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd01ccec147c,5D24FD22556E,IN LIKE BECAUSE MOST PEOPLE WILL LOVE TO CLEAN THE COMMUNITY. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24b8cbf558e0,5D24FD22556E,LIKE ME I WOULD LIKE TO ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+30bb01687d62,5D24FD22556E,BUT PEOPLE NEED TO GET TOGETHER.IN THE PRINCIPAL IS RIGHT BECAUSE THEY MAKE OUR SCHOOI AND COMMUNITY LOOK BAD ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+580a69ecf1bd,5D24FD22556E,IN I KNOW I WOULD TRY TO HELP THE SCHOOL TO GET THINGS TOGETHER AND I KNOW I CLEAN MY ROOM AND DO THINGS FOR MY MOTHER. AND A MOST EVERY DAY I CLEAN THE FRONT YARD AND THE BACK YARD IF IT DIRTY OR LITTLE BIT MESSES. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a556fe5c236,5D5F108C0FC9,I myself do not think that students should be forced to do community service because community service is something that people should want to do. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e049b176781b,5D5F108C0FC9,Maybe you could have motivational speakers come to your school and talk about helping you community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12d49f23ab34,5D5F108C0FC9,It should be a choice either you can watch your community get trashed even more or stand up and do something about it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a8c2ffdf85e,5D5F108C0FC9,Maybe start a group so people can work together and get rewarded for helping out the community kids love rewards like food activities and medals (trophies). ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+759a3293406e,5D5F108C0FC9,"That way kids would feel like their making a change and getting rewarded that's a great feeling. Some kids think community service is dumb and gross because you have to pickup trash. But if kids get rewarded they will strive to help in their community and stop trash build up on the freeways and out in front of their own houses little thing will start to build up and make kids want to do big things like go to other countries in need of help and help out with them like in Haiti were there is still a lot of rubbish all around. Kids and adults can help out every where there is need of help from the state of Ohio to all across America and then the whole world! 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+95a7a01cc503,5D5F108C0FC9,But then there or those kids who don't want do anything because their lazy or cause they have disability's ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+efd99e2db413,5D5F108C0FC9,If kids see adults doing stuff for the community like teachers famous actors or just normal every day people that kids look up to they will want to help out as well so if kids don't want to help its their choice ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f012d2ff55fe,5D5F108C0FC9,"If you force kids to work their not going to their job right they will goof of get in to fights and make more trouble. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+500aadd403bd,5DB8391BB037,"I think our school should keep performing community an service, because it's a fun and good task, and most kids at different schools don't get the opportunity to experience community and service day. ",Position,Effective,,,
+07b214068e0d,5DB8391BB037,"It's also a good source on ourselves, so that could mean a good thing on our images when we get older, or even when we go to college ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fd8b9b9908c,5DB8391BB037,I also think that for the students who don't want to continue community and service can have consequences here back at school or they either keep going with the other students. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4da0600ba84f,5DB8391BB037,"Helping with the community is a great learning experiences for us middle school students, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81c86f651c5b,5DB8391BB037,"since we never got to do it in elementary besides help wash the dishes in the cafeteria in elementary school, so it's fun here. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cd3ecc3a0f0c,5DB8391BB037,for those who think community and service takes too much time away from what they need or want to do ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1b6f6d73eacb,5DB8391BB037,"should stop woring about it becasue it may be boring sometimes or fun, but they should just know that we are doing this for a good cause by helping the community with feeding and clothing the homeless, helping out sick and needy kids that are at the Children's Hospital, helping with the MRDD children at their school, at the dog shelter, etc. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6c0dbedd9634,5DB8391BB037,"those may be boring, nasty etc, but just always know you're doing something by helping your community. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+38322a9fc992,5DD063D65899,"Source 1; What is the electoral collage?
+
+The electoral collage is a process, not a place. The electoral collage process consists of the selection of the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral of the electoral votes by congress. The electoral collage consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The Congressional delegation one for each member in the house of representives plus two for senators. The 23rd Amendment of the constiton the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral collage. Each candiddate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party but state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by political party. The state law vary on how the electors are selected and their responsibilities. The presindential election are held every four years. After the president election the governor prepares a Certifiate of Ascertainment.
+
+Source 2; The indefensible electoral college; why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong.
+
+Under the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president. If you live in Texas and vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electores pledged to kerry would get 34 electoral votes. On the off-chance that those electora won the statewide election they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 votes. The single best argument against the electoral collage is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people are lucky that 2000 fiasco was the biggest eleection crsis in a century. Back in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with the new electors who would oppose John F Kenney. He was a great learder.
+
+Source 3; in dedense of the electoral college; five reasons the keep out despised method of choosing the president.
+
+The number collage is widely regared as an anachronism a non- democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the electoral college method is not democrtic in a modern sense. When you vote for a president candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. There are five reasons for reatining the Elctoral college despite its lack of democratic pedigree all are practical reason not liberal or conservative reason. In 2012 election for example Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes. The electoral college requires a president candidate to have trans- regional appeal. The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates as we saw in 2012 election to focus their campagign efforts on the toss up states. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+28704117370f,5DD063D65899,After many years of no one has changed anything else about the election camagign or anything. I think its time to do that. Lets put a girl in the office she can do just as good as a men. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e25d211e7840,5E178A82D743,yes there should because our school is not clean and a lot of students leave there trash and they blame other people. For some other people trash . That's not right that they do that so defenetly . ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4110d791c5ae,5E178A82D743,We shold have community service for those student that don't clean up there own mess. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e033c357fe1,5E178A82D743,I think that is a great idea cause when u put that rule they would start to listen to the school rules. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8e0562fceaa,5E178A82D743,Then they would all see how we need to listen to the school that when they say to clean up is time to clean every body should listen to every thing the principal wants every body to listen to him to what he says to students and also listen to your teachers because that is not fare you don't do the right things. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c7edc9b6520,5E178A82D743,I think the students would listen to him he is a nice principal. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2131f0b83b42,5E1DEB2AAE39,Dear senator of Florida. I am here today to tell you what I think about the Electoral College. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9ae827b76809,5E1DEB2AAE39,"I think the the Electoral College is a very irrational way to elect our presidents of the untied states of America. It might have been effective when it was first created, but now it dosent seem like it can work out anymore. ",Position,Effective,,,
+3a817859b54a,5E1DEB2AAE39,"
+Well for starters, under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. This was stated by Bradford plumer in his article : The indefensible Electoral college: why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a165261cafd,5E1DEB2AAE39,"This is not fair to the citizens. They should be alowed to vote for whatever president they want, instead of letting a bunch of electors ""pledged"" to the candidates vote for them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cd266421909,5E1DEB2AAE39,"
+Plumer also writes : ""Can voters control whom their elctors vote for? Not always."" What does this mean? It means that the times when they can""t control them, they could be using the citizens vote to vote for other Candidates other than the ones they are supposed to be pledged to ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf3a26a96afe,5E1DEB2AAE39,. It's not fair that sometimes citizens can't control who their elctors vote for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5bf2024a9345,5E1DEB2AAE39,"This shows that this great ""system"" is starting to fall Apart. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6ab9f6818efa,5E1DEB2AAE39,"""Do voters sometimes get cofused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes."" This is why the Electoral College needs to be abolished. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dd32031af615,5E1DEB2AAE39,"The electors put on a facade and allow the voters to become confused. This allows them to easily fall into the trap. Its like trying to show a blind man a picture. You must give details about it in order to create a picture for him to follow. This is what is going on with the voters. The electors sometimes gove them false information to follow, allowing them to vote for the wrong candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+674af7c092ee,5E1DEB2AAE39,"In an article written by Richard A. Posner called: In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing our President, He states That the advocates are correct in aurguinng that the Electoral College is not democratic in a modern sense. Even an article that is supposed to support keeping the Electoral College says that it is not democratic. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60e39a312440,5E1DEB2AAE39,the Electoral Collge is not democratic at all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d83e3846546,5E1DEB2AAE39,"
+In Plumers article, he talks about the time a state sent two slates of electors to congress. It happened in Hawaii in 1960. Luckily, Vice President Richard Nixon, who was presiding over the Senate, validated only his opponent's electors, but he made sure to do so ""without establlishing a precendent."". He finishes that section by asking: what if it happened again? This was not just a small little mistake that happened. That was a big problem that could have changed everything ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28b561705f0f,5E1DEB2AAE39,The Electoral College Has to many flaws to keep running and this was one of them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e76352346f6,5E1DEB2AAE39,"America was meant to become a democracy, and if we keep the colleg, it will always keep us from becoming it. I agree that the Electoral College was one of the best Sytems created. Unfourtunatley, not everything was meant to work out in the long run. Jobs, careers, school, buisnesses, relationships, and the Electoral College. It has made vital mistakes that has caused us not to be able to have much faith in it anymore. It was good in the begining, but now its time for it to come to an end.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd46f9b29f06,5E461378597B,Imagen this say a presidents term is up and your congress wouldnt you want a say in who you might work with or would you just have to keep up with two candites that you dontknow. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cb491a13728a,5E461378597B,we as a nation should keep the electoral college vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0dc423317f20,5E461378597B,our founding fathers put that in the constitution ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aab69d25c0e9,5E461378597B,this makes congress think harder about this decison. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c623cabfc6bb,5E461378597B,"the founding fathers made that decision the hard way acording to the article the founding fathers put that in as a compramise what this means is they had to do a lot of work to set the system up the way it is its not right to just change the system like that and ruin their work, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e69917b05bca,5E461378597B,it has been that way for many years and it has worked alright look at jhon f kennedy we had the electoral colege system in place look how it turned out. Another example george washington look at him first president and his term turned out great so we had a bunch of sucsess with this system its not worth changing with the results it got. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d285cd727d1,5E461378597B,this system makes congress think about its nominations for president ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bbea2e7ee32c,5E461378597B,for example the article said the electoral college consists of the selection for the electors this means congress hs some time to meet and think in wich to vote. the passage said the electoral college consists of 538 electors so this means they got to reach a consensus and with a concensus everything is put to tghought so the bad things of each candatite is put to tgought. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2734bb7246b6,5E461378597B,the passage did say the electoral college is unfair and outdadated ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b86a465107ef,5E461378597B,but with the results we got from this system however the results have been great this means we had failures but we had some succsess ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+36b1e9694e7f,5E461378597B,so this system does work and when it does the results have been great. the article did say this winner take all system is unfair to voters but this system has shown great results with various presidints. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8692d2e71927,5E461378597B,"the system makes congress think and it has been put in place a long time ago by the founding fathers but it works so congress go look at some future candatites and vote for the best one, citizesens dont let the failures of this system persuade you to not vote go out there and trust the goverment we have gone this lets continue to move fowrward with our countrys economy and vote for the president.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+43e6b7d660f7,5E5A892CC4F5,The electoral college is not a place to be harmeed its a process. Therer a amendment of the the electrol college and it is amendment 23rd. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+eedd545ed6c4,5E5A892CC4F5,we should keep awere electrol college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+46762db925b1,5E5A892CC4F5,it is a good place to learn about the presudents. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+06e7528ea2ef,5E5A892CC4F5,We deserv this dont let walk away from us. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5159a64ab228,5E5A892CC4F5,most people runing for presudent has there own group of electors. it is chosen by the candidate's. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b1270ef3afcb,5E5A892CC4F5,you do not have the right to take ower electoral college. most of use wont this out of all of use 1 person did not vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6e2c2893469f,5E5A892CC4F5,The presidentaial election is held every four years on tuesday after the first monday in november. when you vote for presudent you help to choose your state electors. most state have winner take all that gets a prise for the winning presudent. which is why we need to keep ower electoral college. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3c26b350ee0b,5E5A892CC4F5,We have a right to vote we can help choose state electoral. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+26f3d335f738,5E5A892CC4F5,The electoral college consists of 538 electoral. The amendment 23rd gives us ower rights. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+301a267a9530,5E5A892CC4F5,we can vote you cant take away awere  electoral college let us be. We can do nwhat we wont we can vote just like others have before.                             ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cf33e2c0a4cd,5E85F1FB4E22,"Driverless cars may be modern and use half of what todays taxis use . Yet they are not truly driverless, they still alert the driver to take over in certain conditions , for example pulling in and out of drive ways or driving through road work or accidents. Which brought them to the idea of embedding streets with an electrical cable that sends radio signals to a reciever on the front and end of the car , which is stated in the passage. These smart road systems worked well but require massive upgrades to existiing roads , which is simply too expensive. So with out the smart roads a whole lot of sensors are needed on the car , one specific sensor is the special touch sensor which makes sure that the driver keeps their hands on the wheel at all times . Besides that there is also seats that viberate to alert the driver and flashing lights on the window shields , which would add on to the price of a car. Also stated in the passage that so far none of the cars are completely driverless. They can steer , accelerate and brake themselves but they still notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills . This means the human driver must be alert and ready to take over at all time. Which might not always happen , a driver may not always be attentive of the road ahead even with alerts included in the car. Which brings up the case of a drivers, passengers , and pedestrians saftey , and lawmakers know that saftey is best achieved with alert drivers , which is stated in the passage. Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Infering to why in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars. Yet even if traffic laws change , new laws willl be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If an accident were to occur due to the technology failing , who is to blame the driver or the manufacturer. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+62939aa5e77c,5E9964522D41,"In the course of human existance, humanity has always been striving for progress, you might say going the extra mile, in order to better our society. One such great invention was the automobile which allowed us to travel great distances in a short period of time. Consequently, the natural instinct, to grow and improve, has been transfered to the idea of the automobile through the self driving car ",Lead,Effective,,,
+977e0254abf8,5E9964522D41,Self driving cars are the future of transportation as the offer a host of positive benefits ,Position,Effective,,,
+b765b21cc4f1,5E9964522D41,"precise driving capabilities, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5004309b2866,5E9964522D41,"increasing affordability, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1b330a099b21,5E9964522D41,new safety technology. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c81e6ffa574c,5E9964522D41,"The self driving car has begun implementing technology that can revolutionize a car's self awarness. For example the article states, ""spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3D model of the car's surroundings."" Unlike the human eye, the LIDAR radar sees anything and everything; not only does it never miss a single detail, but it also has a 360 degree view that current drivers simply do not possess. These sensors are expecially useful when backing up and driving backwards, as many drivers struggle with getting a full view of what goes on behind them. However, with the LIDAR radar, this problem is eliminated, making backwards driving easier. Putting radar into the drivers seat is not so much about losing the human touch of driving, but getting a more accurate perspective on the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f500103ad1dd,5E9964522D41,"Secondly, the technology is finally in a place where self driving cars are becoming a feasible economic option. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d35e9f680b3,5E9964522D41,"Sebastian Thrun, founder of the self driving Google car, said, ""There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting. The sensors weren't there...Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars."" In fact, alot of the technologies, including radar, used in self driving cars have been around for a long time. However, in recent years, they have become alot cheaper and precise, so that the dream of creating a self driving car is a reality. The goal of the self driving car was never to create a billion dollar high tech vehicle accessible only to the rich, but one that could be mass produced and avaliable to all. With cheaper, mass produced technology, it seems like this is not too far up the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+94e2809eabfb,5E9964522D41,Finally we see that the self driving car may actually be safer that regular drivers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb649d4ef8d4,5E9964522D41,"With so many deaths accounted to texting and driving, the idea is that people would be able to safely text when the car drives itself certainly has its appeal. However, when the car needs a human touch, ""displays [texting] can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not avalible to drivers trying to text with a cell phone."" Shutting off the display would force drivers to pay attention to the road during tricky situations and reduce the number of car crashes. Secondly, the use of sensors helps detect and prevent crashes. The article says, ""sensors have become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or rollovers. This information from the sensor can cause the car to apply breaks on individual wheels,"" which could stop potential dangers in their tracks that the driver may not be aware of. In the end, a self autonomus car is always vigilant and is never distracted, making it safer than having a human driver. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+40803cff614b,5E9964522D41,"Self autonomous cars are more accuate, becoming cheaper, and are safer than today's cars, making them the car of the future. It is only a matter of time before someone develops a self driving car that can be mass produced, and when that day comes, we should embrace it with pride. Together, let's drive towards creating the car of tommorow, today.                                                                                                                                         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+52fb6613140f,5EB7A0B134B4,some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b7c7f57c6661,5EB7A0B134B4,I think students would not benefit being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+50b851dde632,5EB7A0B134B4,because they can not be on their telephone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3589d20c8b03,5EB7A0B134B4,not due what they are spouse to due. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c937af5a7152,5EB7A0B134B4,I want to play whit my brothers go out side play soccer and i say just for a little I am to playing with then but a get distracted and i for got the i have to do homework or study for a test. Some time I get distracted by seeing my brother playing video even went they is a lot of noise i get distracted because i want to what is happening or what is going on. I remember one day the I have to finish a test review at home because I do not have time to do it at school I do not finish because I get distracted by brothers. They were making a lot of noise and i could no concentrate because of then. My brothers are the same way as me they can get distracted fully easy and not pay attention on what they doing maybe they star by doing they homework but they do no finish because they get distracted by the TV or the video game. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52ab94801cd6,5EB7A0B134B4,"Second, they can use the telephone some time I get a lot distracted whit my telephone because I away want to be in the telephone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a92a705e674e,5EB7A0B134B4,"Went i home I just want to be in my telephone and i do not do my homework. I get fully distracted because I want to text whit my friends or playing video games in my telephone and not Du what i suppose to to do. Went I am at home I have all
+
+I want my bed my telephone the TV the I forgot the I have to how or study for a quiz or test. Only because I at home and I have all i need some time i do not want to do anything
+
+I get distracted fully easy and more if I have my telephone in front of me because i want to leasing to music or video chat my friend and talk and pay attention on what I suppose to due. Some time my mom tell that I have to stuff in the house so I have to do it even if I am doing homework or studying I have to what she say and then a can kip doing what i was doing. If I have my telephone whit me the only thing i what to do is be in the telephone because it is a easy way to get distracted and not due what you suppose to due. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ddb61418834,5EB7A0B134B4,Some people my say that if students have home school it will be good because some students can get bully at school and they do not want to go back. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dd7a097eca59,5EB7A0B134B4,"The is say for then because some the students do not ride the bus the parent have to take then to school and the take a lot of time some time because they have to wait. Even they are going late for work and they do not have tame to take then to school. They may say the if they have school at home they do not have to do all the work by taking then to school. some time a lot of kids get bully at school and it more easy for then do do it by home because they do not have to deal with at school they do to have to be worry what would happen to then the net they or what does people are going to do whit then, But I chose to not have school at because some people can get distracted I not saying the all people have the problem I am just saying the i have the problem they my not have. But I do not like have home school because i want to see my friend graduate whit then have fun some time go to party and now more people have more experience. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8f6d10ff376,5EB7A0B134B4,"In solution, people can do what is best for you if you like do school by home because you do not like people or have personal problem or have i disability that you go it no one is going to say anything. But some time people want to have friends have fun because you are a person the like to be around people that good to. the only thing i am saying chose what is best for you not what is best for other people or what other people think. Make you own decision be proud of you no matter what. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9668d515d115,5F1044A9C6A6,I think you should  change the election by popular vote for the presiden of the united states because then the people would choose who they like better and it would  easyer to vote . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4d903a9e3a85,5F1044A9C6A6,the reason why you shouldent agree with the electoral  college system  is that voters do not vote for the president .but for the slate of electors who in turn elect the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3dc283174f3,5F1044A9C6A6,so the electors can be anyone not holding public office. the state picks on the electors and sometimes state conventions and state partys central committe and the presidental candidates themselves. so  what i am saying is that if change to popular vote  it willshare the candidate share of the electoral college and invariably eceeds his share of the popular vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1fecad719ed1,5F1044A9C6A6,there are five reasons for retaining the electoral college despite its lack of democratic pedigree and all are paractical reasons are not liberal or conservative reasons.      ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e819dccfd86,5F626697DD15,"In the past years our country has been run by a ""electoral college"" voting system. Has always been the soultion to our (america's) equation. Its been in bussines since 2012 now and so far has seen no problems. Our country has a strong base an voting system for our country period . ",Position,Effective,,,
+8811461a530e,5F626697DD15,"another great reason electoral college has , is that a big problem ,like ""Big States"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3974560fdbb4,5F626697DD15,even if the state has a huge population  than other states . they equal out the vote of thepopulations so that every one could have an equal chance. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c7526a902dd,5F626697DD15,"Like how every thing is settled majoritry rule , but in this case ""everybodys president"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3230593a5f4,5F626697DD15,"Every one has part in the election during Electoral College , no one is left out like popular voting ways. From ""source 3: in defense of the electoral college :five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president"" by richard A. Posner. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+370f2495810b,5F626697DD15,"Even though"" elctoral college may some times be unfair out dated , and irrational.""(from ""source 2: the indefensible elctoral college: why even the best -laid defenses of the system are wrong""). ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0e507b33eb4d,5F626697DD15,The way we are voting now has no problems so far ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8a1bd3378142,5F626697DD15,"by far this is the best efficent ,wide variety of choices an accecible to all in the U.S. It has been updated and fitted toward our government.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f6d5568b6075,5F931A3FF8F9,"Even after proven wrong, people are still thinking that the face on mars is an actual alien made face. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+fc96cd8f60e8,5F931A3FF8F9,"In paragraph 10 it staes that on April 5th 1998 a global surveyor flew over Cydonia with a camera 10 times sharper than the photo taken in the original 1976 picture, shown to prove that on this picture the closer up it looks less like a face. But this wasn't the end of the research. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2cf3de29cb14,5F931A3FF8F9,"The reaseach continues but with an even better camera to try and prove all of the conspiracy believing people wrong. In paragraph 11 it states that the new digital image taken in 2001, was a 3 times bigger sized camera from the 1998 photo, and it was sharper than ever. This image spans over 1.56 meters! If this ""face"" was made by aliens, then why were there no artifacts found around the photograph? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+747a7126dccc,5F931A3FF8F9,"The extremely high def. picture would have shown said artifacts. But there are still specticals believing otherwise. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+76585666ecb0,5F931A3FF8F9,"The pictures are proven to be a natural born landform, pictures don't lie. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf0ece0da8d4,5F931A3FF8F9,"Yes, maybe if we were ON Mars we would find some new facts to maybe prove one anothers views even more ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e253492e81bc,5F931A3FF8F9,but for right now NASA is winning. Conspiracy theories are theories. Picture evidence is pure fact shown to a persons face. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6b06f71c2f25,5F931A3FF8F9,"Just like the belief in wether or not earth and people were made by god or science. They're both theories that's why people have to have ""faith"" in what they believe. The Big Bang theory for example is a theory because it doesn't have enough evidence to be proven that it legitimately happened. It goes the same with religion. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b0559749a176,5F931A3FF8F9,"In conclusion, people all have thir different beliefs. Some believe that the ""face"" was alien made, some believe it's natural born. But no matter what people believe, fact is fact. What would you believe, a conspiracy (something not officially proven) or a fact with picture evidence? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+523b6890e4c8,5F9EA3F22EDD,Twenty five years ago somthing happend they were in space and they found the face on mars. I am going to give you some ressons why aliens did not make the face on mars here is why ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6e09a902750f,5F9EA3F22EDD,When pepole say that the face on mars was created by aliens they are wrong ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4bfa3190cdd0,5F9EA3F22EDD,The face on mars was a pictures that the vikings took from 1976. When vikings were snapping pictures of possible landing sites for its sister ship viking two. So we already know that there were pepole on mars before so they might of built the face on mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e3f45c355d26,5F9EA3F22EDD,Mission controllers had to be preparede to look agian. Then gavin said ''its not going to be a easy to target cydonia''. Althoght that few sientiste belived the face on marswas an alien artifact pictures became a priority for Nasa. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9389a2d961bd,5F9EA3F22EDD,Some people might thing that aliens made the face on mars he it is why aliens did not make the face on mars ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4e4acfe7f347,5F9EA3F22EDD,What pepole do not know abot the face on mars is that there was a picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the american west it also canbe reminded most of the snake river plain of idaho. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99e888cf7319,5F9EA3F22EDD,When the viking took the picture it was 1.56 meters and when the vikings were not around no more Nasa took the picture again and it was 43 meters per pixel. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7abaf069135,5F9EA3F22EDD,Thousand of pepole gatherd to see the image first appeared on a JPL site and a natural landform. Whe they saw the picture they right away notieced that it was no alien monument after all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45a825342ba6,5F9EA3F22EDD,The face of mars has become very populer icon it was in hollywood film on books and magazines and also radios and grocery stores. Some people wanted to defenders of Nasabudget wish that a ancient civilzation on mars to destory the faces of mars. Few days later Nasa recived a image for all to see the caption noted a rock formation that resembles the humans head. Nasa wanted to do a surprise amoung missions controllers back at the jet propulsion lab when the face was appered on their jets propulsion lab. When Nasa got the pictures they said that about the same height as the face on mars. Whe they got a rule of tumb you could discern things in a digital image three times bigger then the pixel size. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+556dbad043f7,5F9EA3F22EDD,So i thing about what i told you you can know say that aliens did not create the face on mars. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e3a2a0f10723,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"Recently I have begun to research the difference in effect on the people of Ameirca, between the Electoral College and the result of popular cote for President. I have found out that our founding fathers created the Electoral College in the Constitution, so that while the votes between Congress and the people may be different, ther could be a compromise. Our country; well our world, is evolving with the changes in generation. 2015 has come upon us, and with this year brings a whole new change in cutural diversity and tehcnology. So while I believe sticking to our coutry's Constitution is vital for some reasons, I also believe it is outdated in others. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ff7e97b3ec0d,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"I believe that the Electoral College puts a restraint on the freedom our people, new and old, should possess. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+06d1e40f0e3e,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"Our people have to vote for a party, a group of people that don't show either their faces or their true personalities, to trust well enough with their vote to go for the President they think is right for the Country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+607cd3273e4f,5FBEBF4F7E1D,Although that is very rarely ever betrayed- as noted by my recent research ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+76cae516f4bd,5FBEBF4F7E1D,-I do believe that it is against our certain rights as a United States citizen not to know who exactly we are putting our faith in. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+369aae149df4,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"Also, even if we do put our full faith in these mysterious political parties, like we have for years and years, who's to say that our vote will even matter? Al Gore, in the year 2000, had more popular votes from the people than Bush, yet he received fewer electoral votes, which decided the winner of the election. Why have us put in our vote at all, if it means nothing to 538 politicians? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db095911fbbc,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"Our country is made up of millions, upon millions of strong women, men, and children and they should be the deciding factor in the  elections. It's our country just as much as it is the men that make up the Electoral College. A requirement of 270 electoral votes must be made in favor for one presidential candidate ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6bddb9ee852c,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"why should such a small number mean more against the millions from the citizens of this great country, the same people that make up the great state of Florida. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+03ad3709beb6,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"I understand the need for the Electoral College, when it comes to some decisions. Like avoiding a national catastrophe when it comes to the nuber of swing-votes. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fe9227c4722f,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"While I am a woman of passion, I do allow myself to see both sides of the story and I think while the Electoral College can do good, it can also do bad for this country. It is outdated, overused, and wrong. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+47529134454,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"Our founding fathers built the Constitution and this country we call home, and while that is a great thing...times are changing and the power of the House, and the Senate, should now be moved on to the people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9a8020b7f47f,5FBEBF4F7E1D,"Some states, like North Carolina and Rhode Island were even unable to know close to anything about the current eection between Gore and Bush in 200. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10c67ba09b5a,5FC3B96C3EA1,I'm here to talk to you about keeping the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40156c4589a6,5FC3B96C3EA1,The electoral college is a prodess that our founding fathers established ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d735b84c2f80,5FC3B96C3EA1,Its said to be in pur decleration as part of the 23rd amendment. For so the district of Columbia is allocated 3 elctors but only for the electoral college. With saying we vote every 4 years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. When a citizan votes for their candidate choice they are also voting for the candidate's electors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f4e5827ebed,5FC3B96C3EA1,There are ups and downs to having the Electoral College. For one the peoples opinion should matter ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6076551bbce4,5FC3B96C3EA1,They were given a gallup poll in which over 60% of the voters prefer a direct election. In 2000 we had our great fiasco which was the biggest election crisis. Eventually the electoral college fixed it. When ever the votes are tied the house of representatives get involved which can change the whole election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0de9efde53cd,5FC3B96C3EA1,With saying all of this there are 5 reasons to keep our lovely electoral college: ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a04fc692048,5FC3B96C3EA1,"1) Certainty of outcome:
+
+Disputes are possible but very unlikely to happen. There are a total of 538 million votes. So its very easy for there to be a landslide of a vote.
+
+""In 2012's election Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney recieved all the basis.""
+
+2) Everyone's President:
+
+One region (south, northeast, etc.) does not have enough votes to elect a president. In saying that no favorite candidate recieves any electoral votes just because he increased his plurality in states that for a fact he can win in.
+
+3) Swing States:
+
+The winner-take-all method shows the candidates that they should pay attention to the toss-up states. These states will pay very close attention to the candidates campaign, showing that they need to focus on their campaigns. The toss-up states are more likely to be the thoughtful voters and the most thoughtful votes should decide the election.
+
+4) Big States:
+
+""A large state gets more attention from presidental candidates in a campaign than a small state does""
+
+5) Avoid Run-Off Elections:
+
+The electoral college avoids having an election in which no candidate recieves the majority of the votes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e4d0d5357e5,5FE588C6DDB5,"As stated in the article, the Electoral College process consists of the selction of the electors, the meeting of the electors, where they vote for PPresident and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The Electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. A state's entitled number of electors is equal to the number of members in its Congressional Delegation. There is one for each member in the House of Representatives, and two for every Senator. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6cafe33b800c,5FE588C6DDB5,There are many reasons why the voting process should be changed to popular vote instead of the Electoral College. ,Position,Effective,,,
+0cb9c48c0950,5FE588C6DDB5,Unfair elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9bfe5dbb89f,5FE588C6DDB5,the freedom of the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdca4e83d71a,5FE588C6DDB5,the Electoral College is often considered an anachonism and is unliked across the nation. The reasons for which vary greatly from certainty of outcome to big states to swing states. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a3e86cfe1979,5FE588C6DDB5,"Certainty of outcome means that one of the Presidential Candidates has to be cosen to become President. There are no recounts in Electoral College, whoever they like the most becomes President, and that ins't fair to the people. Bigger states tend to have more members in the electoral college. This can greatly influence an election if a big state like Texas favors one candidate over the other. Swing states are the states that recieve more atention than other states due to bias, greatly influencing votes. In my opinion, this is something that needs to be changed. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bd26c7ed3f8e,5FE588C6DDB5,Citizens of the United States of America are the ones who are supposed to decide who should be the President of the United States of America. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c2a5cfb6410a,5FE588C6DDB5,"It isn't right to select a few people from each state to decide who the President will be. That power lies with the people, and nobody should be able to take that away. The votes of millions and millions of people are out-weighed by the votes of a few hundred men and women. This is unjust and unfair in every way. If all the people in the United States wanted somebody as President, but the Electoral College disagreed, the Electoral College would win. Why should the Electoral College have more power than all of the people of the United States; they shouldn't. The power to decide who is President of the United States of America should always lie with the good citizens that live here. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1a877f373054,5FE588C6DDB5,"I hope that the voting process will change. I hope that it will finally become fair. That it will become what the people want it to be. It should be what the people want it to be. We the people of the United States have the power to change this, and we should work to change it. The voting process should no longer be the Electoral College but should be dicided by the people and only the people. The voting process needs to be fair and needs to be what the people want it to be.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1c7bade6942e,5FE67C1664B6,"I know and believe the
+
+""face on Mars""
+
+is just a natrual landform. I don't find it possible that this landform could be evidence for any life on Mars. Even if it was why would there be a head without a body to be found? Also, why would NASA hide something like this, this would be considered a good discovery? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4cf7486e4bc4,5FE67C1664B6,"All these things are reasons why I believe that ''face on mars'' is a natrual landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+1c526a2a5231,5FE67C1664B6,"""Face on Mars could'nt of possibly been evidence of life on mars because, why would there be a face but no body to go along with it ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dee86dd85b2b,5FE67C1664B6,"Also, If NASA had dicovered something as amazing as life on Mars they would be happy to let the world know. The only reason to believe there is life on Mars is the natraul landform other than that there is no reason to believe. In conclusion, I do not believe that the ''face on Mars'' is proof of life. I also feel that the natrual landform is the only reason people believe that it is. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a91b0155397,5FF1D599D746,I STUDENT_NAME has had it with the principal ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d2f7fc628a34,5FF1D599D746,just because students have C' s doesn't mean that you yourself should keep them from what they want to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+368795f66d45,5FF1D599D746,why would you change that thy can't be in sports because they don't have a B average inside class that's just plane out dumb if some of the teachers say that a C' s ok then that mean a C' s ok i know your a principal and all but you must understand that most of the students with a C turn out to be a really good athlete ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13d1fe6e806d,5FF1D599D746,"not all students wound be standing at a B average in there class.
+
+So don't be so harsh about students getting a C ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a138e36c546,5FF1D599D746,i know you want us to do well and all ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+786867fa89ca,5FF1D599D746,but you just need to calm you nerves a bit and stop getting so worked up and stuff i know this isn't a nice letter to you but how else would you understand or do you understand ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c9cf12616e01,5FF1D599D746,hope you can reconsider about students getting what they get to me its not fare to those who don't have an A or a B but they are good at sports an cant join ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+649505a5dd1b,5FFA4762D642,"I beleive that you should consider voting against the electoral college. Now you may ask why, but, I assure you that the electoral college is a way for corrupt presidential candidates to win the office and make this great nation a horrible place. ",Position,Effective,,,
+4bc37d8749e3,5FFA4762D642,Segregationists replacing voters of one canidate for another ,Claim,Effective,,,
+98d2a8b713fa,5FFA4762D642,the election could become a catastrophe if a tie were to happen ,Claim,Effective,,,
+75b2aa084cbb,5FFA4762D642,"there is a chance of a ""disaster factor"" happening. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+15e4f90f0679,5FFA4762D642,In 1960 segregationists in Louisiana nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose J.F.K. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+47ea5f323482,5FFA4762D642,"Source 2, Bradford Plumer, The indefensible electoral college: why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, P. 11, line 44) Imagine if the corrupters had been able to corrupt the election, we might have had a fiasco bigger than the 2000 presidential fiasco. If we were to continue to turn our backs on the matter we would soon be run by fatasses who spent all their time gaming and would claim they know exactly how the sytem works, opposed to a real man who spent all his time rising from the bottom up and knows the system by heart. Who do you think would win if those 2 people were to run for President? Not the one who should. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0eda2bf6eec1,5FFA4762D642,Some people claim an electoral tie is impossible ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+689a4cc1a08b,5FFA4762D642,"but, in 1968 a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election, if that doesn't seem so bad lets take a look  at how many people are in the United States alone. In 1976 a tie would have occured if a mere 5,559 voters from Ohio and 3,687 from Hawaii had voted the other way. (Plumer, P. 12, line 80) ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b5d0a5155e76,5FFA4762D642,"The election is really only a few swing voters away from catastrophe, and possibly, the worst government shutdown these United States have ever seen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f50946d1b4b,5FFA4762D642,"So, if 41,971 voters from 1968 didn't seem like alot, then lets look at the 9,246 voters from 1976, ties are seemingly getting closer and closer, what will happen when it is too late? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21fc3a2c930c,5FFA4762D642,"There is  always the off chance of a ""disaster factor"" occuring ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66e6a060558e,5FFA4762D642,"like the one in the 2000 Al Gore VS. Bush Presidential election. Imagine if that were to happen again, only, this time, we put a blood thirsty, war hungry, nuclear savage into office. Imagine the Iraq and Afghanistan wars from 2000-present and then imagine them being fought on our own soil, imagine, instead of little Iragi children fighting against an invading force, your children fighting against an invading force, and that is just one of the minor things that could happen. Imagine if we put a man in office who thought the way to answer everything was through nuclear war, imagine what would happen to the United States. These are just a few examples of what could happen if another ""disaster factor"" were to happen again. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c401d9a6f93b,5FFA4762D642,"These are the 3 reasons as to why i beleive you should consider voting against using the electoral college. Imagine if We the People actually got to vote OUR favorite president into office on OUR own terms instead of some idiots a political party throws together, imagine how much better off we would be than we are now. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d075e5d57b7c,603108B7285B,"There is a lot contraversy regarding the Electoral College system of voting in the United States. Some voting members would argue that the system, although flawed, has yet to make a monumental mistake, and say that the minor issues were resolved or at the very least barely effective in the overall outcome of the capmaign. However, with the flaws and holes in the system we have alerady experienced, there is bound to be many more mistakes, and it would be shocking to very few that some of those mistakes are catastrophic ",Lead,Effective,,,
+88dc1da8909a,603108B7285B,"We should remove the system of the Electoral College because it is questionable, problematic, and does not represent well our democracy. ",Position,Effective,,,
+6bdefa6cfd54,603108B7285B,"The Elecoral College uses a group of people from each state, numbers varying from each, to represent voters in an election. The voters mark down a candidate on a ballot. However, they are actually voting for a group of strangers to represent them. Many voters do not even realize that this is the case. In politics, there are many powerful and influential people who will go to drastic measures to ensure that their ideas somehow make it to power. Bribes and insentives could easily be given to electors in attempts to sway their vote. Speaking of, these electors can be anyone who are not in a public office position, emphasis on the anyone. Voters can never really be sure that they can trust those strangers who they did not even get to select. Once the votes have been counted, voters cannot fully control who the elctors actually vote for. There have been instances where electors have attempted to completely avert the votes cast and choose a different candidate that they want in office. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+72040b9a2910,603108B7285B,"It only seems logical that voters should have a direct say in the presidential election by participating in an election by popular vote. This way, there is less opportunity for scandal and confusion in the voting process. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+700ec75503bf,603108B7285B,"In 1960, a group of segretationists in the Louisiana legislature almost succeeded in removing electors who supported John F. Kennedy with those who opposed him. If this had happened, all of the states electoral votes would have been cast by biased electors, rather than by the actual voters themselves. In the same year, Hawaii sent two state electors to congress instead of one. It is sad that we maintain a system in our government that continues to let issues like this arise. Along with issues with the electors, why is it that the size of a state automatically gives it a bigger advantage in elections? Texas and California are the most two saught-after swing states in every election. Candidates will do everything they can to win over those electoral votes. But what about the little states? Many of the smaller states do not get visited by candidates. Some never even see campaign ads. This system we are using creates target areas in the United States that are more valuable in elections than others. This is in no way fair to the voters in smaller states, despite having the exact same rights as voters of bigger states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9ae940c21a8b,603108B7285B,"The Electoral College is proving to be less and less glamorous with every passing election. Slip ups like this can create a monumentally bad situation, and unfortunately, this system is only bound to create more. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ac59fa49c761,603108B7285B,"Many people remember the problem of the 2000 presidential election. The Electoral College had very effectively exemplified its flaws and unefficient ways of opperating. Al Gore and George Bush were running apposed, and despite winning the overall popular vote in the country, Gore lost the election to Bush. Bush had received the most electoral votes, therefore winning him the presidency. Basically, despite the fact that more citizens chose Gore to be president, Bush won out. In our constitution it is written that citizens of the United States have an unwavering right to vote and select who gets put into office. In this case, it sounds more like the number of electoral votes has an unwavering right to select who gets put into office. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+615b752acff8,603108B7285B,"This goes against a democratic republic way of opperating our country and, in many ways, makes it more difficult for cititzens to take advantage of their rights. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+35f8a63ec2f9,603108B7285B,"For as many frustratingly resolvable problems that are created by the Electoral College, there are certain things about the Electoral College that could possibly make it worth keeping. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+05d53e5a6675,603108B7285B,"For instance, there technically is no region of the country that has enough electoral votes to vote a president into office, so no one area of the controls large numbers of votes. Along with this, the system helps avoid Run-Off Elections (which complicate the election process and provide a clear winner). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+da2d6426cd02,603108B7285B,"However, having a straightforward election where the votes come straight from citizens is most constitutional and much less problematic. The process has been used for a long time in our country, but it is time to make a change. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5dd77415f1c3,603108B7285B,"The Electoral College has proven to be more trouble than it's worth. Our country needs to decide what is within best interest for representation of our citizens, the most efficient way to opperate one of our most sacred constitutional rights, and maintain our democracy as members of our wonderful country. Remove the Electoral College system.       ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+de3486b63fa0,603D38C864DD,I deeply support the fact that community service does the world a lot of good. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8322978fbabb,603D38C864DD,I do some service on Saturday mornings. I go to the nursing home with a few friends and try to cheer up the tenants. Studies show that people who do community service are less likely to do something infatuated further down the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2474e7e68901,603D38C864DD,"Some people are just to busy to devote their time to community service because they could be taking care of their children, or doing sport activities, they could be doing college work or even homework. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f9379fbc9e3f,603D38C864DD,"Middle school and high school students do not have a lot of time to waste they need to start planning for college, school years is a time to experiment with new activities. It is a wonderful thing to do (community service) but not everyone has the time. Adolescence is such a hard time for children anyway we shouldn't give them to much responsibility because we will just get disappointed . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42e62fb74e84,603D38C864DD,"There is different things we can do though. Instead of ""making"" people do community service. We could have a chart over a year and the child has to do so many hours of service can get credits for graduation. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f08cd499fe92,603D38C864DD,"But not so much that they could fail all classes and still be able to graduate because they did so much community service.
+
+If you are really going to take this seriously I would highly suggest asking the children if they would like to do this. If a lot of people are interested maybe make a sign-up sheet for them. Since so many kids are busy you shouldn't make them doing something likes this unless they are volunteering there spared time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+173bc80a87c1,603D38C864DD,Community service is such an amazing thing. It really shows how much America has grown. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7527c60a4606,603D38C864DD,"Times has changed a lot. Fifty years ago kids didn't go to school because they had to help their parents out on the farm. Now we have computers, video games, cell phones. All these things that distract us from what is really important, helping people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f26d940a82f,603D38C864DD,We should try this for a year and see if it could possibly catch on then start circulating our ideas throughout the States. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5ae0bd774d0f,604B7BE00CDB,I think we should keep the electoral vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f41cc36b37a6,604B7BE00CDB,My reasonings are: certainty of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ea38f4275e6,604B7BE00CDB,everybody agrees with him/her ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3e5818c0a97d,604B7BE00CDB,swing states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+043659c283a0,604B7BE00CDB,"big states, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e03959d66a1,604B7BE00CDB,avoiding run-off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6ee043f8d3d,604B7BE00CDB,There is a certainty of the outcome if we keep the electoral voting system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b2386e56062,604B7BE00CDB,It will be more accurate than using the most popular vote. If the election of 2012 would have been accounted to popular votes than Barack Obama would have lost the election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe7f325ede71,604B7BE00CDB,We want to have a president that believes in what we believe in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+430824aba9b9,604B7BE00CDB,We also want a president that appeals to everyone not just one region of the United States. We want to have a president that gets things done like Obama has because we are in a lot of debt. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+458ce5403616,604B7BE00CDB,Swing states have a big impact on whether he/she is in office or not. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6557efbeaef,604B7BE00CDB,They are more likely to pay a attention to their campaign than other states. They have more of an impact to whether they win the election or not. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33e90e9d90ef,604B7BE00CDB,We need big states to help win the elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14157371f895,604B7BE00CDB,Without them the presidents wouldn't get as much electoral votes from bigger states than from the smaller states. You need more electoral votes then the opponent to win the election not just popular votes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbecf416db27,604B7BE00CDB,With the electoral college we would avoid run-off elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4164a37dbc1e,604B7BE00CDB,Run-off elections are when nobody gets the mojority of the votes. With the electoral college we would be giving the presidency to the candidate who has the most electoral votes not the most popular. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cef485574c86,604B7BE00CDB,So in conclusion if you have more popular votes that doesnt mean anything. If you have more electoral votes you will win the election.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3967bfec1043,6058577A0EB1,I think we should keep our method of choosing our state president ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+9e22d2828c15,6058577A0EB1,it more easier then any other method ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+422c1845a852,6058577A0EB1,"it less time consuming. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54fadf3624d7,6058577A0EB1,College voting method is the most easiest method to use ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7276290074d5,6058577A0EB1,All we have to do is vote and who ever gets the most votes win. I think its just a fair method to use. I feel like the other method is just to complex so we should stick to the college voting method. almost half of the time to president we choose is the right president for the US. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ddb5561fae62,6058577A0EB1,Another reason we should keep the college method is because it wouldnt take that long. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6605f184ca3b,6058577A0EB1,All we really just have to do is vote and in no time our president will be in office. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f437d198c18,6058577A0EB1,in conclusion I think we should keep the college method because its less time consuming and its an easier process.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+509686555261,605DDEFB7A40,"The United States is a democratic country where the people decide on a leader through voting, or so it's supposed to be. We Americans use something called the Electoral College, where a state is worth a certain amount of points, and when you win that state for your party, you gain those points. I find this to be unfair, because you could win by popular vote, but lose because the opposing party won the states with the biggest number of points. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b5b699028d24,605DDEFB7A40,"I think that the Electoral College should be removed and replaced with popular vote only. It would make elections more fair, and it would make peoples' votes feel like they change something. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d38cb607381d,605DDEFB7A40,"When you go to vote, you don't actually vote for the candidate, you vote for a group of people who in turn vote for the candidate. I find this to be ineffective, because the people you are voting for are still able to switch there vote to the other party, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1eda9aa65661,605DDEFB7A40,"humans aren't the most honest things on Earth. Also, there is the feeling of being important that you get when you think that you could tip the scale, it makes you feel special, and in control of your own country. What's the point of voting if there's a chance it might not matter, because the other party just won California, the state with the most amount of points, 55, and you couldn't do anything because you live in Idaho or North Dakota, with only three little points. Popular vote would make you feel involved, and happy to help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+22a0a475926b,605DDEFB7A40,"As I stated before, each state has an amount of points based on the population, which in turn affect how much you help your desired party. Seems reasonable, right? You would think that the more the population, the more impact it has on the election. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f594de9cc524,605DDEFB7A40,"That's right, but it's also unfair because states that have noone living there could all vote for one party, but it wouldn't help that much, unless the points were close and that state tipped the scale. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0d8b7605cb99,605DDEFB7A40,"But big states, like California, Texas, and Florida have some of the most points, so if you were to win those, you already have more than one hundred points. Candidates would try to just seek out those jumbo prizes and systematicaly try to win the largest behind ""the Big Four"". If someone was reading this and wanted the Electoral College, they could say that the big states would still have an advantage with more voters, and that is right, but they wouldn't be as big of prizes. So the election turns from a voice of the people, speaking up for a new leader, and turns into a mad chase to get the biggest prizes before the other party, like a game of Monopoly. In Monopoly, you buy areas with your money, and when someone lands on that space you own, they have to pay you. The places ath the end of the board have the priciest cost, but the best outcome. You can also build property on spaces to make the enemy players pay more. If you were to buy those, you practically win the game. On the other hand, the spaces at the begining are basiclly worthless, costing about 100 dollars and giving you about 1000. Those are like the small states, that have almost no value to the election, and the big states are worth a lot. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c10a28a68ab0,605DDEFB7A40,"In America, the people should be able to feel responsible for their country's future, and not feel as if their state doesn't matter. My own words might not be able to change peoples' minds, but I'm sure the votes aren't tied.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+51abbd6ea5ae,60714BE8146A,"I believe that rather than having the
+
+Electoral College , we should have elections by popular vote ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cc378489fcab,60714BE8146A,"A popular vote can be a better source of election because it gives the people of the state a better chance to express themselves and have a free, independant country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19970338cf20,60714BE8146A,"The process of the Electoral College consists of a meeting of five hundred-thirty eight selected electors, where they vote for the President and Vice President ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8b5bd5c1b989,60714BE8146A,This situation can be considered unfair to many people that do not get selected as electors because there opinion is not put into consideration. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42fa67ab54d4,60714BE8146A,It is said that over sixty percent of voters would perfer a direct election verses the Electoral College. This statistic goes to show that people do not feel that they are involved in our country. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4e9cd824709,60714BE8146A,How can you consider this a free and independant nation if we do not all get the privelage to vote? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+52268ee21b3a,607AB7FA0E57,I think that the second policy is better because students shouldn't have phones during class or on free time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5db1cbb46b45,607AB7FA0E57,Cell phones are going to take learning away from students if they have there phones with them all the time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7b604304ff92,607AB7FA0E57,If we come to school to learn then why should we have our cell phones with us?! I think cell phones during school is going to be bad because it will take away a lot of learning that we need in our life. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+334ce129eb9c,607AB7FA0E57,"School is very important because school will help you get a great job we you get older. If all the kids have a cell phone with them at school then there's going to be less education in there life because they are not dong what they are suppose to be doing, they are texting or calling when they are suppose to be doing there work and learning about history or math ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37685d62078c,607AB7FA0E57,To keep kids focus they shouldn't bring there phones to school or if they do bring there phones to school then give it to the office or your teacher to hold on to it until school its over. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2bc8ea7d0ad4,607AB7FA0E57,I feel that if you let the students bring there cell phones to school it could start something or bring trouble. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1df24ffeed74,607AB7FA0E57,Students will be very off task when they should be focus on getting their work done and not bringing it all home and not doing there work. Cell phones should be used outside of school and not during school. If you let the students bring cell phones to school then your taking there education away from them. If students start to fail because they are not doing what they are suppose to be doing then you are going to look bad because your students are failing from being unfocused. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5dd7f63ce201,607AB7FA0E57,Yes kids bring phones to school when they are not suppose to but not all of them use it during class. They only bring there phones for when school is over and if they need to call there mom or dad. I only bring my phone so that if something bad were to happening after school when i am walking home or if i need to call for a question i have my cell phone. I have never used my phone during school because it is going to get me off task. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f7dad9d6bcd7,607AB7FA0E57,I want to have an education and have a great job when i get older and so do other students but if you let them bring there phones then its going to get them very unfocused and off task. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43aeb1f20c10,607AB7FA0E57,I hope that you will keep cell phones from use in school. I know that students will be mad at first but they will see when you let them bring there phones how unfocused it is during school. Kids have a lot of things going on in there life and when they have a cell phone i bet they talk about how they feel to there friends. Also it is a off task thing because of un answer questions they might have from a friend or some one. So please hear me out and do not let students use cell phones at all in school.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99d8adbe3301,60C439A28A94,"Distance learning is a form of learning that allows students to learn outside the classroom setting through video conferences and online courses. This form of learning allows students to learn in any environment they want, whether that be their home, a library, or any other setting they feel most comfortable in. Although this may seem like a good option for students to opt for, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2870fe44dcd5,60C439A28A94,"students would not benefit more as opposed to learning from an actual classroom setting in a school building, especially when thinking about the resources and skills that schools can teach and offer. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+312b4725d3de,60C439A28A94,"One of the many reasons why schools exist is to provide a social setting that students are able to immerse themselves in. Schools provide a setting in which students are able to able to socialize with other students, creating a group or community for themselves as they form friends with the students they attend these classes with. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e7f4a557f687,60C439A28A94,"This is not provided online; take home-schoolers, for example. Many home-schoolers report feeling socially isolated from people of their age group as a result of not having the social setting to thrive and form friendships in. These home-schoolers are not given the opportunity to create bonds with students because their classes are primarily online; it is because of their isolation that many home-schoolers find difficultly forming friendships with others. Online schooling and video conferencing takes away that social aspect of school, and can thus result in students who are unable to socialize with other people when it comes to the real world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b041035916f9,60C439A28A94,"However, there are people with certain anxiety disorders who would appreciate being able to learn from the comfort of their own home. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3ea6d0e8854b,60C439A28A94,"But, immersing them in an environment that encourages social interaction would be a more ideal situation as they would be able to learn how to overcome their anxiety; there are more effective, and less drastic measures that can be taken to help a student with social anxiety as opposed to taking them out of the classroom setting altogether and replacing them with online settings. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1eb3b0df65ef,60C439A28A94,"Not only do schools and classroom settings provide the ability for one to form relationships and learn how to interact with other students and adults, they also instill the necessary cooperative skills that students need in the real world once they have completed their school career and move onto the next step of their adulthood. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b9d42f0fdeed,60C439A28A94,"For example, schools have their students build collaboration skills through group projects; online schooling or video conferencing does not provide this same benefit of collaboration. When a student is working from the comfort of their own home, they are not actively collaborating with other students; it is essential for students to have the ability to cooperate with other people in the real world. These group projects add the benefit of teaching students how to work with others in order to get certain tasks done, preparing them for when they have to inevitably work with other people they may not necessarily like. Online schooling is largely independent, and requires the student to rely on themselves and only themselves, while classroom settings teach both independence and dependence. Students must learn how to work with other people so that they can learn how to deal with individuals who are difficult to cooperate with, and so that they learn to rely on others when in need of assistance. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+455fe8df1ddd,60C439A28A94,"Not only do online classrooms lack certain aspects necessary for a student to survival in the real world, but they also lack the accessibility of help when a student needs it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2c6776fc61fa,60C439A28A94,"In a classroom setting, students are able to ask for help from their peers and teachers so that they can better understand the topic they are learning about. Online settings do not have this help accessible to their students all the time. Video conferencing may provide that needed assistance should a student need it, but students may feel uncomfortable asking for help as video conferences are typically done in masses; students who are all taking the course from home would be on the video call, and asking questions would require teachers to stop their lesson to re-explain a concept to everyone because one individual asked for help. In addition, video conferencing settings lacks the ability for that students to bond with the teacher, unlike classroom settings, which can increase their feelings of discomfort towards asking for help. An example of this lack of accessible help can be seen through loudoun vision, an online system which allows students to take their classes from home and online. Many students who take courses through vision feel an overwhelming anxiety about taking the class because they do not have a teacher accessible to them; they are expected to complete overwhelming amounts of work without the help of a physical teacher nearby. As a result, many students procrastinate doing the work, and are thus left with more anxiety about the class in general. Students who take vision courses complain about their teachers, who have a tendency to fail them as a result of doing an assignment wrong because they did not understand it. It is because of these scenarios that physical classroom setting are more beneficial than online or video conferences, as they have the necessary resources for students to be able to ask for help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f5ac09ac555f,60C439A28A94,"When comparing distance learning and in-class learning, it is evident that students would benefit much more from being in a classroom setting than from learning in the comfort of their own homes. Not only do online classes and video conferences lack the ability for students to gain any sort of social skills, but they also lack the ability to teach students how to cooperate with one another, which is an important skill that students must acquire to survive the real world. In addition, in-class learning allows for students to ask for help when needed. It is because of this that students would not benefit from attending classes at home. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ba051463a565,611532F64D30,In my honest opinion I dont even think that we should have a President. Presidents dont do anything other than make things worst for our country. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8528f1e0eaa3,611532F64D30,"What they do is maybe fix one or two things that the previous president did wrong but they add more problems for each president to fix so instead of trying to add more problems to us just dont do the job and give work to the government because obviously the government has enough time to make up lies and excuses on why things happen when instead the government themselves can do it, that way no excuses have to be made up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6973d9126add,611532F64D30,"It may not be my place to talk about the government at all because I dont know what they are talking about but honestly thats not the point, the point is that Americans are too dumb to realize when the Government is lying or even telling the truth ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7a00b28a1efd,611532F64D30,because they can never hear the real truth everything is the truth to them but if you deep and deep and deep youll find more and more things that to get suspious and you question yourself but youll never get to know the REAL truth because our government is corrupted and they lie to us Americans every time there is misery.    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1356c110fd97,612EB8B104BC,Transportation or cars will always have an huge impact on the economy. Think about how many people use cars today. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+99926f41fc16,612EB8B104BC,"Driverless cars has many positive aspects, but lets focus on the negative outcomes. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6e94bd1accd2,612EB8B104BC,Look at the companies making computer-driven cars compared to the cars that need humans. There are hundreds of places manufacturing cars that considerably need humans. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b0ea0b87a3b,612EB8B104BC,If computer-driven cars take over sommany people woukd lose out on jobs that they have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+611e944c444b,612EB8B104BC,If the technology of the car was to fail and there is an accident there is question about who should take the blame ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fcb5aaf03e1,612EB8B104BC,"Safety is one of the major concerns. The manufacturer or the driver? This issue alone can cause conflict. If certain laws change the entire technology of thounsands of driverless cars must be updated,right? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2b795a47af3,612EB8B104BC,With so much debt at our hands I do not believe that driverless cars should be anywhere close to growing closer to the people by 2020.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2d40a3fecdb9,615429644163,Everyone should have an opinion on what they think is right. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9ca0b2203515,615429644163,Congress should change the election by popular vote for the president of the Unites States. ,Position,Effective,,,
+53f9ed5c6d44,615429644163,The popular vote shows what citizens want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+931fc303b9fb,615429644163,lets people have the freedom to choose who they want to be president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d48cc62c9d4,615429644163,have a better result. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37eb0129daf5,615429644163,"First of all, the popular vote shows what citizens want. It tells the government what they are doing right or wrong. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b47e4892811,615429644163,"For example, if people say they want a democracy, that tells them that they want the right to speak for themselves. They want the freedom of speech that they deserve. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f850c0b5b99,615429644163,"Furthermore, the opportunity to let people make a decision of who should be president for their country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b80da54ae88,615429644163,"For example, when people were voting for Obama or Romney, Obama had the most popular votes. That shows that the citizens trusted Obama in representing our country. They liked what his plans were going to be and trying to help us with our problems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e8f20aa40da,615429644163,"Lastly, it provides an accurate result of who should be president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bd5a230d4473,615429644163,"It gives the percentage of how many people actually voted for the person that is going to be elected for president. For example, Obama had 61.7 percent of the electoral vote and 51.3 percent of popular vote. The votes show that people wanted Obama to be president instead of Romney because people like Obama's future plans. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+606af16ff4db,615429644163,"In summation, instead of having an Electoral College, it should an election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Popular votes helps the government understand their citizens better. It lets them know what people want from the government, allows them to have the freedom to make a choice of the president, and gives the government a picture of how many people liked a candidate's plan for them. All in all, popular votes would make elections for the president a lot better to understand.                     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7bf5d5d7fc08,616F112B59F4,i have heard of the policies that you are choosing ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+67291205e56c,616F112B59F4,you should choose policy 1. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b854767b6825,616F112B59F4,Because we need cell phones in school for emergencies ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fbbd83b8341,616F112B59F4,like ''mom i just got accepted to a concert in band'' or ''mom there is a crazy guy in school and we are in lock down I'll call you back when you can come pick me up' ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+132aa9e8e6f6,616F112B59F4,there are some kids that do use them during class ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+317d00ad9075,616F112B59F4,but you can just simply make a rule that if you do use them in class you will have to buy a new one or something ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+3a22cef8b3b1,616F112B59F4,we can use the sell phones to see why a friend is missing class or that the homework was page 65 in the text book ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e0bfd8f7447,616F112B59F4,there are all kinds of reasons on why we need to bring cell phones in school not to text your friends but to call for emergencies you never know what might happen in school ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2f176fa14eb1,617F2F7BF090,I am personally against the policy that states that a student has to maintain a B or better average to play a sport or participate in activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+20d25bfed06e,617F2F7BF090,To sustain a C average without playing sports is one thing. But if someone sustains a C average while playing one or more sports is actually quite an undertaking. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+113de750c51b,617F2F7BF090,See I play sports and I have an A average but believe me its not even relatively close to being easy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a752e179f102,617F2F7BF090,I believe that other rules having to do with the sports themselves should be altered before there is a change in the grade requirements. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0b1dce960737,617F2F7BF090,If you are going to change something about the sports program change how long the practice can be or the amount of practices allowed per week. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4b1b0362412a,617F2F7BF090,"That in itself will give the student athletes more breathing room so they will have an easier time bringer their grades up. If these work than you can keep the required average at a C, but if these fail, that is when you would be obliged to make the required average a B so the students have more drive to keep their grades up. But at the time I think you should change the limitations of the sports programs in itself before any of the grade requirements are changed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0f9e340142be,6180C9A37B2B,I think it is a good idea to make students do some community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fc23665b0e4e,6180C9A37B2B,Some people around here need help and if we do this we could help very many families around the state. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da7fb9649dd5,6180C9A37B2B,After school at least 3 times a week we can help a family or person in need. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7c9fd42144af,6180C9A37B2B,"Kids think that doing this is stupid and they shouldn't have to, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f725ac993de9,6180C9A37B2B,but we all need to step up and help out the community. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+884ee8242a12,6180C9A37B2B,"We could give away toys, clothes, and anything else we don't want, don't need, or could be helpful to someone else. Or we could send out ten people to go to every school in the county and read books to people in 1st, 2nd, and 3rd grade. Some of us can work in a soup kitchen whenever they are free. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec8d1ba0f8be,6180C9A37B2B,Maybe sometime we can have an assembly at our school and we can hire a public speaker to tell us about how helping the community can help us and everyone else! This could be a great idea. And remember it only takes a few people to make a difference! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+07ec482ec101,61D04D45D0BB,dear state senitor I humbaly suggest that you don't turn from electoral college ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8358feb57fc1,61D04D45D0BB,"cause there are many people who depend on that college as a electoral support. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e84878098d2a,61D04D45D0BB,You may think that we dont need the electoral college ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+76a4cbf4b3ca,61D04D45D0BB,but we do need the college because we also vote there and if  we dont then we do other important stuff there. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+33289c1da107,61D04D45D0BB,so inconclusion changing the college to a popular vote could be a bad thing to do ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+be5a112ae983,620419154DDF,We should go with changing to election by popular vote for president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+efda4f323b2f,620419154DDF,"under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who turn in elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1873c473a38e,620419154DDF,"The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century,the system allows for much worse. Back in 1960, segregationists in the Lousisiana legislature nearly succeded in  replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+819fb6502850,620419154DDF,Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15ab03a9502a,620419154DDF,"In the case, the election would be thrown to the house of Representatives, where state delegations vote for president. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including Rhode island and South Carolina, and the voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+894294ab4902,620419154DDF,"Its official: the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. So the United states will not being the Electoral college ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+459c33ac06b8,62563E5C6E8E,"This ""face"" is just a natural landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1157265da9bc,62563E5C6E8E,"These things happen a lot, you can get a lot of diffrent shapes and sizes from natural landform this one on mars just happens to look like a really realistic face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72b52dcd600a,62563E5C6E8E,"Plus the ""face"" has changed alot from 1976 to 2001 ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3d525d99f5ac,62563E5C6E8E,and we saw the face change with no alien near by changing it and not cause of the camera but because this natural landform is getting older and soon you won't ever be able to tell it was there. There will be other natural landforms and might look like a face ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e598c1cbb746,62563E5C6E8E,The spacecraft circling the planet would've caught an alien near by ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9d735f484d59,62563E5C6E8E,"Also it looked alot more like a face in 1976 because the landform is changing and moving so the ""face"" moves and changes with it. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+22afad6c152e,62563E5C6E8E,"Then the team went out there to snap photos and all they got was a sharper view of the ""face"", and no one near by except them. There could be a lot of landform shapes, one could look like a animal or something. These landforms can look like a lot of things and be natural landform and can be creating without aliens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38ea5b205d6a,62563E5C6E8E,So far we haven't had any proof of aliens ethier. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6eff19a1e7f4,62563E5C6E8E,"I believe if aliens were real we would find some by now cause we have spacecrafts around certain planets and we've been to the moon and still nothing. Maybe in the future we could find aliens but not now and it's been a while since the ""face"" has been created and we have no proof of aliens and we didn't back then ethier. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cfa748dc4235,6262ED336DBD,"Driverless cars are the new future to this planet and in technology. There needs to be a new and improved way to drive cars, even if the driver does not need to touch the steering wheel. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d76483e27428,6262ED336DBD,The cars that he foresees would use half the fueld of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8faff153fb64,6262ED336DBD,the Toyota Prius that uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel which would allow you to estimate how far away or close you are to a curb or another vehicle. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41d5bd70ee11,6262ED336DBD,the safety that the car would be capable of. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fedfb2cf5b4f,6262ED336DBD,"cost effective in the long run which means that over time, you will get your money back from the car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a54ae8e57683,6262ED336DBD,"The manufacturers have thought of a way to allow the car to drive and think for itself and allowing the driver to relax until they get notified that they should take control. Cars that are smarter will allow you to save more money and cost less mechanically, as well as save on fuel. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f14579dbcac6,6262ED336DBD,sensors and displays in the car that allow you to focus on the task at hand when you are driving. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+603950483086,6262ED336DBD,"Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver said, ""We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way."" In the car that he is overseeing, it uses heads-up displays and information systems that will notify you of an accident ahead or a roadblock that calls for a detour. The displays can be automatically turned off which is something not available to drivers who are texting and driving. Another detail would be that of manufacturers consideration of using cameras to watch the driver to make sure that the driver is paying attention if he or she needs to take control of the car. If the driver is paying attention to the road, then he will not need to be notified and or have the company of that car be notified. It allows the driver to pay closer attention to the road and not his surroundings. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+09b6f75a1d9d,6262ED336DBD,"Safety is a number one priority in cars and in life as a whole. If your car is safer to drive on the highway, it will reduce the cause of accidents and save you and others around you money. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8d070698dfbf,6262ED336DBD,"That is why manufacturers are considering using displays that will automatically turn themselves off so that the driver does not get distracted behind the wheel and cause a serious accident. GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object, which would then notify the driver that they are too close to an object and that they should stop immediately and look at their surroundings. All of the little gadgets that are put into this car as well as other cars, are allowing the driver to pay better attention to the road and the objects around him. Cars are getting smarter by the year which is reducing the number of accidents per day. Which is why driverless cars are a must for safety. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a4669772490e,6262ED336DBD,"The reasons stated above show how and why that driverless cars are a must for everyday life as we know it. They save you money by not having to pay so much for gas everytime you have to fill up. The car is being driver by the hardware that is inside of it and it will notifiy if you need to take over and steer. The last reason is safety. If the car is not safe, it should not be on the road. Driverless cars are allowing the driver to pay closer attention to the road as well as what is happening around him better than if he had all the lights in his face and his phone placed in the cup holder or in his lap. The driverless car is being developing to become something greater and more useful for everyday human life. This shows how and why driverless cars are a must for everyday life and why I agree with the developement and manufacturing of these cars. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+868e82e98cf6,628019536B7A,I believe that students should be able to play sports with a C average ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b7935dc48835,628019536B7A,some students may have a hard time just keeping there grades to a c average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8eb8a87e111f,628019536B7A,"They may have a c average but at least there passing, right?
+
+As a student I love to play sports such as softball, but it can some times be hard for me to keep my grades up but if I had to get a b average in be more difficult for me to try to achieve it that. It can be hard to play something I love and have to keep my grades up at the same time.
+
+I am awake 15 hours a day and more than have of that time is at school, and, while I go to school it takes up more time that I would have to study but instead of being able to study I have to learn more things.
+
+If the students have to get a b average but aren't able to it will stop them from doing something they love. Students could try to make time to study but it could be very hard too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae867a431052,628019536B7A,"Now you see why you shouldn't change the average levels. It could make a huge difference in the students and there love for the school. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5dd2d95222fc,6298002ACB46,"Some people think there is life on other planets and some don't, but in 1976 many people thought NASA had found life on Mars. In 1976 Viking 1 took a photo of mars which looked like a face on the planet's suface. Many believed that this was a sign of life on Mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+869565bb77cc,6298002ACB46,"Many of the NASA scientists didn't believe that the face was alien related, but it became a priority for NASA ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b91bfd5b079,6298002ACB46,"Soon the Mars Global Surveyor was sent to take more pictures of the face to better find out what it was.
+
+In 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor reached the red planet and took the pictures NASA needed. The pictures it took were more detailed then the ones in 1976. At home, thousands of people waited for the image that the Mar Gobal Surveyor took to reach to web. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d143a1763fc8,6298002ACB46,The reveal was a natural landform and not alien artifact after all ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e9684a67b25f,6298002ACB46,"Still some people didn't belive that
+
+NASA was hiding something. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5e34cee87913,6298002ACB46,Even though NASA and it's supporters said they would have wanted it to be alien. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7a1f6ea09daa,6298002ACB46,"Some people still believe NASA is and was hiding something, but we may never know. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6c645569388b,62AC1AA7FC86,"In the arcticle Driverless cars we are told about how cars are evolving are humans are needed much less they they are now to drive a car. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+2af6122b7d0b,62AC1AA7FC86,"my position on driverless cars is that cars should just be left alone. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+28d21a3305eb,62AC1AA7FC86,We dont need all of this fancy stuff for our cars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+828478a8b00d,62AC1AA7FC86,"well we can make our cars look good but we dont need things like parkiing assistance or driving assistance, or ever assistance on car repairs.
+
+cars should just stay the same we dont need all of this fancy stuff just to drive a car.
+
+Driverless cars are not really needed that much becouse people are still learning how to drive, or they are older adults and they already know how to drive. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84f7ca095eb4,62AC1AA7FC86,"One good thing about the carfs is that they can drive themselves so for like old people like like to ride in cars they can go on a nice joy ride even though they cant really drive anymore.
+
+Another good thing about the cars is that there is a sensor in the seats that will vibrate when you are near or very close to let you know that there is danger near. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0bc42fd64e74,62AC1AA7FC86,when you are coming up to a work zone or it is a zery traterous road the car will not drive by itsself ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a66b84bf61b,62AC1AA7FC86,the car will tell you that you will need to drive right now until they are passed the danger then the car will drive itsself again. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb69d79686eb,62AC1AA7FC86,when there is a car problem such as the engire is failing and the car wont start the car will not be able to tell you what is wrond what you need to do to fix it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4aae4d3617d9,62AC1AA7FC86,"yes smart cars can be very helpful sometimes exspecially when they are needede the most.
+
+But if there is a problem or a danger ahead the car wont try to help you instead you will half to get away from the danger or fix whatever is messed up by yourself.
+
+The car could helpm us in the future but before any of that happens its going to need a few modification before the car is affective and helpful. when the car has been upgraded i think that it will be a lot safer and the car will be a ton more helpful then what it is now. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+749eef7210d3,62AD0D768FD8,"""I can drive with no hands!"" I can just imagine my baby brother saying that in a couple decades. The future is just a little bit ahead, and driverless cars are going to be the biggest thing since the wheel and just a flash. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+576357999f29,62AD0D768FD8,"Driverless cars would be a postive, efficent, and a improvment in the world, ",Position,Effective,,,
+cb2677860476,62AD0D768FD8,"there would be less accidents, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7f8c90e16169,62AD0D768FD8,"a smoother and quicker navagating system, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+795c410ec1b6,62AD0D768FD8,could make America on top because of our technoglicial advances: such as a driverless car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+178084dc1f14,62AD0D768FD8,"how many car accidents happen every minute around the world? I bet a lot. And why are there so many car accidents? Problaby because there not many of smart driver being asisted while on the road in traffic. Just imagine if that could be prevented. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ced1b21cb426,62AD0D768FD8,"Everyone would be able to get to where they want to go without waiting in a long line on the highway for hours. And if its a smart cars driving people would get lost and stranded places as much. Having a driverless car could be more efficent for older people too. They would be able to go places their self with out riding the bus, and waiting and catching rides from other people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c9a380cdbdc,62C826B33D79,i argue you that we keep the electoral collage because of its many pros ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c3da5b918f01,62C826B33D79,Taking away the electoral college would be like taking away an important part of our U.S history ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+46221efd0e7f,62C826B33D79,the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+057aa2654f2c,62C826B33D79,With the electoral college there would be more discussion on the topic of making smart descions to electing a president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a8bc96aabdeb,62C826B33D79,Keeping the electoal college will keep a professional way of electing a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+daf5e89a1592,62C826B33D79,"The electoral college selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee (and the trust given is rarely betrayed). With that said, it will be a fair and most likely a cheat free zone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27b2a979f545,62C826B33D79,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e398041aaef,62C826B33D79,"When a run off happens this creates pressure of the voters, until the help of the electoral college comes in, which in this case helps break everything up and claim a true winner. For example, in 1968 nixon and clinton in 1992 both had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the electoral college, 301 and 370 electoral votes, respectively. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+85d1d63ecd11,62C826B33D79,And that concludes why i argue you to keep the electoal college and not popular vote.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff6c79dd460d,63268F421EE1,I personally think that there should be an electoral college vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+07bd577e5785,63268F421EE1,Not only does it keep the popularity vote out of check ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d2823c1fddb8,63268F421EE1,"it also holds a good amount of personality behind the fact that it carries over 100 years of tradition, divide that by 4 years per term of president, thats over 10 presidents that have won their electoral college votes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e58d47a497f,63268F421EE1,"If they used the popularity vote? We would go insane. If the people realize what  they are talking about, we could go billions of dollars out of our debt hole were in.. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+77c7064cdffc,63268F421EE1,"Our spending habits these presidents we have had over the past years have lead us into doing? Im surprised were all still alive honestly. Different candidates have different ways of planning their lives in office, their daily commutes, their daily functions, what laws they are going to put into place next, the next time that they will make a public apperence, those kind of things. But when theyre talking about taking electoral college out of play because its ""outdated"" personally I would say throw them a box of loony toon cereal. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0629d455f44d,63268F421EE1,I dont believe in throwing out something our founding fathers came up with. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6ea6f545132d,63268F421EE1,"Expecially now that we have so many of our constetutional rights going out of play and being laid to rest for the many  years that they helped serve us justice and made us actually realize our country went to war to fight for our freedom, thats basically taking away our freedom to have who we think is best in office. Everybody talks about both candidates. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d39d3dda0c3,63268F421EE1,The  popularity war also wouldnt work because they talk about both of them equally as another citzen would. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a13227bfdef9,632C8DA9E2B1,"In my opinion, Im in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ",Position,Effective,,,
+164f11b02baa,632C8DA9E2B1,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight racs in the ""swing"" states."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ff89a57fc9ff,632C8DA9E2B1,So basically the electoral college doesn't give a fair chance to voters and that's not right. All voters in every state should get a fair chance. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+101d17c3057a,632C8DA9E2B1,"""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college!"" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69f3bec6060b,632C8DA9E2B1,"""The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense . . . it is the electors who elect the president, not the people."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+60179c2798de,632C8DA9E2B1,Which once again is not fair and isn't right. If people are taking the time to vote then they're the ones who should be picking who the president is. Not the electors. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ed737a78b175,632C8DA9E2B1,"""When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d93510a47c06,632C8DA9E2B1,"""The single best arguement against the electoral college is what we migh call the disaster factor. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+13fd471951bf,632C8DA9E2B1,"Consider that the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people."" This is an example: ""In 1968, a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election; In 1976, a tie would have occurred if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way. The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b05c2eda4067,632C8DA9E2B1,Those are a couple great reasons and examples why you should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States instead of keeping the Electoral College. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2d3d5ef88d95,632D9999C23C,I think that we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America ,Position,Adequate,,,
+88d6edfef301,632D9999C23C,because it makes more sence to change to the election of most popular votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f922c65846e9,632D9999C23C,"because lets say people vote for one president more than the other president but the president that got less votes gets picked because he/she has more electoral votes than the other.it says on paragraph three in source one that""The electoral college process consists of 538 electors.A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president"". This states that the president can get more electoral votes than the other and still get to be the president. i disagree with that i think it is not fare for the president who gets more qualified citizen votes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83f9483acc0e,632D9999C23C,The citizens are the ones who need/want the presidnt why not give the citizens what they want and what they all vote for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49c16d6e2b2e,632D9999C23C,You should give what the citizens want because hey are the ones who are voting for the new president or the same president one more time ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8aa2496c192,632D9999C23C,"it says in paragraph 10 source 2 ""under the electoral college system,voters vote not for the president,but for a state electors.who in turn elect the president"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c5cc33fe75f,63587869CADC,Today I want to talk to you about some little problem that's not going as well as I thought it was going to go. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b9a743dd1972,63587869CADC,"Electoral College is not a good idea for us citizens. Because everybody in this country that works and come from another country , should be able to vote for their President. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f3614e1a9b6f,63587869CADC,"The Electoral College consists of 583 electors. A majority of 270 electoral vote is required to elect the President.
+
+The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c118f32827e4,63587869CADC,Us citizens think that's a better idea. Don't you think? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+281f07aa2173,63587869CADC,"The presidential election most have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidental candidate. And after the presidential election, yout governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"". Listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party.
+
+According to Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole they agreed on abolishing the electoral college . The electoral college won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60% of voters. What that means? 60% of the people didn't agree with the electoral college. The single best argument against the electoral college is what they might call the disaster factor. Us the American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was  the biggest election crisis in a century. The state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors , and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.
+
+At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each states they know they have no chance of winning , focosing only on the tight races on the ""swing"" states. During the 2000 compaign seventeen states did not see the canditates at all. Including Rhode Island and South Carolina. Also  voters in 25 of the lqrgest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. The electoral college is unfair, outdated , and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertionw without much basis in reality. Bob Dole was right. Abolish the elctoral college!
+
+In conclusion, The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism , a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. There are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigtee; all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5a91a72446b,636755267395,I think your decision on whether all students on doing community service should be a yes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+68b5129562db,636755267395,I think this because everywhere you go is always so dirty ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06675d2e9e90,636755267395,"community service won't hurt anyone, it will actually help someone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+10cff9d3beec,636755267395,"Everybody needs to know that our world needs to get better and cleaner. Littering is probably the worst thing out there that you can do. Something needs to change because when you just walk outside of your house there's a piece of trash and you can help by just picking that piece up. If you could get all the students doing community service then those students could inspire other students or even their brothers, sisters or even their own parents. If just one person could help pick up a little trash then imagine what ten or even fifty people could do this world would be better in no time if everybody could just pitch in a little of there time everyday by making the world a little better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9033e6f707b2,636755267395,That is what i think about everybody doing some community service around here.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b6b003cc06ae,63687EA6EB28,Many people that think the face of mars was created by aliens ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5db0e77828d6,63687EA6EB28,it was really just a landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bdc5c77f3088,63687EA6EB28,scientits say its just like a land formation that happens on earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef1e21d31c93,63687EA6EB28,"this land formation are more common around american west the article says ""it reminds me mist of middle butte in the snake river plain of idaho"" says garvin ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ff1f02e19de,63687EA6EB28,"then garvine said ""Malins team captured an extrordinary photousing the cameras absolute maximum resolution"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc631f6e3425,63687EA6EB28,"each pixel in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo in April 5,1998 (MOC) or mars orbiter camera team snapped a picture ten times shapper only for the thousands of anxious web surfers to see a natural landform on mars and not any aliens . but yet not everyone was satisfied on April '98 a cloudy time of year on the red planet the camera on boared MGS had to peer through the wispy clouds to see the face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83c8f2585e8b,63687EA6EB28,perhaps skeptis say alien markings were hidden by the haze. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+995745111619,63687EA6EB28,now many people dont talk about this topic alot any more because it has been proven that it was just a landform created by the plates moving on mars ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c8b0a1fd78f4,63687EA6EB28,all though there are still many people who think that its not a landformation and think that it was bulit by aliens ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a3016b3743a,63687EA6EB28,"in the article it says that the land formation resembles a human face because of the shape of the head and giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74db01d2fd67,63687EA6EB28,experits have proven that it is just a landformation and was not bulit by any extra living beings that have lived there a longtime ago ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25d516305caf,63687EA6EB28,after relason the picture it was a pop icon back then ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cf058cc4599b,63687EA6EB28,it starred in hollywood films appeard in books magazines and even raio talk shows and hunted grocerys store checkout lines for 25 years. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e056de2d879,63765DD9525D,"The Electoral College was created with good intentions, but it has many vital flaws which allow for very unfair outcomes. The electoral college is an outdated, and irrational way to choose the president of our country for the next four years ",Position,Effective,,,
+52f65c2a94a0,63765DD9525D,you can win the presidency with a mere fourty percent of the country in support of you ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1350f6c20839,63765DD9525D,"You can completely ignore some of your voters, as you're guaranteed to either win or lose heavily biased states, and you can gain massive numbers of electoral votes due to one more vote for a side in a state count ",Claim,Effective,,,
+900c37482ad2,63765DD9525D,"system even allows for massive corruption to go unpunished, which is one of the biggest offenses in our country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7b39fa5e42e,63765DD9525D,The electoral college's biggest flaw may perhaps be its ability to elect a president that doesn't even appeal to half of the country ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5ee816fac7c5,63765DD9525D,"According to source two, Al Gore ""won the popular vote but lost the presidency."" Al Gore had a signifigant victory in popular vote for the nation, yet still was denied presidency due to the electoral college's vote assignment system. If we did away with the electoral college, each and every person would have an equal say, and would be equally important to the candidates.  Even source three agrees that the trust in our electors is occasionally betrayed, albiet rarely. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+435d622f5ea7,63765DD9525D,"Republicans have a strongly biased voter base in the south - so much so that generally speaking, the Republicans never have a single rally or major ad. According source two, states like South Carolina almost never vote Democrat. It's so rare, that if you lost, you offended the group that has voted unquestioningly for your party since the system has been put into place. If the electoral college system didn't exist, the thirty percent of southern Democrats would have a say, which would make advertising and campaigning all over the country much more vital. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0fa3f1b74ce1,63765DD9525D,The electoral college system also allows for an astonishing amount of corruption with no punishment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55bec6949669,63765DD9525D,"If a state manages to vote one hundred percent Democrat, rogue electors can still cast their vote for the Republican candidate - and this isn't against the rules. We're essentially putting the next four years of our country into the hands of 538 electors, and holding them to the lowest possible degree of accountability. Again, source three clearly states ""and that trust is rarely betrayed."" While it's rare, it's still more than possible, and can be quite disasterous. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f2a49fac5bb,63765DD9525D,"Some may argue that the electoral college system puts into place a system of certainty and safety, for both the candidates and the people ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a9b5c9b95f79,63765DD9525D,"This, however, is quite far from the truth. According to source three, ""the residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised."" ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b59b6ac902bd,63765DD9525D,"While this source claims that ignoring biased parts of the population, this is quite far from the truth ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+d71a16055596,63765DD9525D,"People are being entirely ignored by the powerful politicians that are supposed to represent them. That doesn't sound very democratic and fair to me. People begin to feel discouraged and that their vote doesn't count, and this is quite close to the being the case. Only one-half of elligable citizens voted in the 2012 election, which means that one half didn't. Half of our country isn't bothering to vote in the elections because the electoral college system completely negates their vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+29f6f2130c59,63765DD9525D,"Our country prides itself on being ""the land of the free, and the home of the brave,"" yet our people are being discouraged at every turn by our government. The popular opinion of our people is that the government is out to get us, and there's not much evidence to contradict that. The electoral college system allows for the government to be run by men who didn't fairly win over our country, and isn't accurately representing our views. It's rife with corruption, and allows money to buy power. If we remove this system in favor of a popular vote election would encourage more popular policy, make our government closer to the people, and have little to no negative impact on our country.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b4a234473b00,639453E90BD4,"Students all across the nation are doing community service to help out their town or city. Whether it is cleaning the streets, helping out in an old peoples home, or tutoring children at a school, all these deeds are good experience and good for the community. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b58dff0ffd15,639453E90BD4,I think that it should be mandatory for all students here at school to do these good acts upon or society. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+826e54020c36,639453E90BD4,One reason why I think that we should have mandatory community service is because it provides knowledge and experience for the child. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e340004efc0,639453E90BD4,"this is because after hours of dedication to helping out, children will see what good they are doing for their friends, family, and other acquaintances in the town. Also, there is a high chance that kids that are not heading the right path, will steer into the lane of success. By doing this, they see how they make other happy around them and will start feeling better about themselves and have a much greater respect around elders. To end off on this knowledge I would like to add that children that to participate in this will have a wider and more open mind. They will be open to new ideas and will learn something along the way ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8d669c1d1442,639453E90BD4,"Another reason why this community service is necessary is because this provides less work for older, more delicate people, and more work faster and harder workers such as students that are in high school and college ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3d742a71dffd,639453E90BD4,"While doing this less older people will be injured in activities such as cleaning the streets, their homes, and helping them with buying supplies needed for their health. This will cause a chain effect on them making them pay less for medical bills and more on other things such a necessities and other good that will help them through everyday life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+095650e4cf30,639453E90BD4,My last reason is because this will provide a cleaner and safer living area for little children and growing teens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+322daee7352d,639453E90BD4,"By cleaning streets and parks, children will have a safer environment to live in and will grow up living in a much nicer area. It is a non-arguable fact that if a child is born and raised in a safer community, free from dangerous litter, they will grow up to be much healthier. From poisonous gasses and rodent killers, to little things like sharp glass and aluminum cans everything will be cleaned up. This prevents choking hazards and toxic fumes to be entered into a child's system. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ffd6ada73dd,639453E90BD4,"community service is needed for three clear reasons: it helps children learn and experience the outside world, it helps the old people community, and makes it a safer living area for little children and adolescents. So please Mr. Principal, make community service mandatory, for the greater good of our living area. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2b095cd717bf,63B0C1CE1743,we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b58b04dc05b8,63B0C1CE1743,its better ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd1f6b9c33ca,63B0C1CE1743,its unique ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d5c838515b6,63B0C1CE1743,"Its better because the Electoral College consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for Presdident and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bbb71b601a1a,63B0C1CE1743,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95749bef62d7,63B0C1CE1743,The Electoral College is really a progress ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+90434012743,63B0C1CE1743,Its also better because you can help choose your your state's electors when you vote for President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4114669a056,63B0C1CE1743,when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. They are generally chosen by the candidate's political party. Its better in alot of ways. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+658bb15cc434,63B0C1CE1743,The Electoral College is unique in many ways ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8f3f8a491ebd,63B0C1CE1743,"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a Compromise between election of the President by a vote for President and Vice Preident, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the preident, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.                   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49fa4f435c81,63C74FF7DB27,Take learning distance on home is not good ideas ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd71dc68d867,63C74FF7DB27,first reason is not the same to take on school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d8eea91b00aa,63C74FF7DB27,when we going schools we have more option to learning. sometime when we don't undertant something we can ask the teacher for helping or they can explain many times. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb191d003fd7,63C74FF7DB27,But sometimes we have to take the classes on home. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+694ceabea865,63C74FF7DB27,for example if you are sick or have a spcific reason that you can going schools is necesary take online because if we whant to learn is the matter we we have to take the classes. the important thing is that we have the energy to continues with your goals. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+74bbcaf3469a,63C74FF7DB27,The Learnig distance on home some time be helping to be more possitive and focud because we can take the clases any hours we can. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fad398d0f21c,63C74FF7DB27,Also when we cut the clases on home we have more chance to listining. The other option to take the clases on home is that we can do other things that we whant. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e45af1a26572,63C74FF7DB27,Some schools give the chance to often the clasas on home that is great ideas. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f8ef3ab20ae3,63C74FF7DB27,but sometimes is really important to going schools beacuse when we going schools we have more chance to take more clases and graduated with the other student. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9730408840a1,63C74FF7DB27,Also take clases for video conferencing or going school is little similar becuaser we can see the teacher that is explain the clases. That uniquet things is we can not ask the teacher for helping. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6507687a5dd2,63C74FF7DB27,In conclusion. To be attend on schools is more important and helping more tham the distance learning or video conferencing. On my posisition attend on schools is more necesary because we have more opportunity to learm and continues to do the things that we whant.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6dfbead9ac96,63FEB8D784FD,"In these 3 sources they're talking about electoral college, I beileve electoral college is a good and smart way to handle elections. AN electoral college is a process made by the founding fathers and they estabilshed it in the constitution. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c4c550669de3,63FEB8D784FD,"Some people planned on abolishing it, I think thats and i'll show you why. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a2e1440c16a1,63FEB8D784FD,"First,I beileve they should not abolish it because its so origanal and whats the reason it needs to be abolished. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9de77001063d,63FEB8D784FD,"They're probably planning on making a new system or doing it for a personal matter. Either way, its all depending if the congress and the president himself to agree on this. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7d124d744670,63FEB8D784FD,Overall abolishing a this from the constitution where its been for too long is wrong. Even though this method is not democratic its still not right to abolish this from the constitution. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0541c6a6513,63FEB8D784FD,"And, I also know why they are some reasons why they wouldn't want this method to be here. In source 2 it stated ""voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of the electors"". Everything depends on the state because it decides most of the voting standards of the whole state. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+02e511d41a08,63FEB8D784FD,"This method can also defy the will of the people, sounds anti-republican and just wierd for legislatures to screw with the votes you jotted down. This practictly almost made JFK not a president apparently he got lucky. Richard Nixon voted aand validated his predidency ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d4f0f6e4fb28,63FEB8D784FD,"In a nutshell, electoral college has its upsides and downsides and is still up today. I beileve its an easy thing to say it all depends on opinion and beilefs.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+db1cd91a04ea,643B41BE89EE,I think that Electoral College is not the way to vote in the future ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+040d96bcd008,643B41BE89EE,We should make a change in our goverment and make elections by popular vote ,Position,Effective,,,
+8338969ac0fb,643B41BE89EE,We don't know who the electors vote for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac4a6fb163a3,643B41BE89EE,The Electoral College is unfair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0929236ec3e,643B41BE89EE,Popular vote is more accurate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21090afe8ec0,643B41BE89EE,If we are going to have Electoral College lets at least know who our elector votes for. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+324e4ff145ed,643B41BE89EE,"""Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always."" By this I mean, not letting him choose who ever he's going for. As in of showing that he took everyones vote and made them all count. Even if the guy he's going for wins the election, we can say it was fair. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+472f727a3dd3,643B41BE89EE,The Electoral College is not fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9d0d51c4060,643B41BE89EE,"First of all we don't know who picks the electors. We don't know if there truthful as in putting in votes. I'm sure they have to have certain requirments to become an elector but we are not the ones chosing them. In the 2000 campaign 17 states didn't even see the people running in the election. Also in an Electoral College ties exist so then it has to be thrown into the House of Represenatives where the delagations will vote on the president. Making our votes worthless because the people in the goverment get to chose whos next to become president. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+60aca9a7ed07,643B41BE89EE,Popular vote is more accurate. By me saying this is that everyones vote counts. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+82d49c9021f7,643B41BE89EE,There's no electors invovled causing you to fall in doubt. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c113d358f3e,643B41BE89EE,"Even though it says that Electoral College electors ""...that trust is rarerly betrayed."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8a6bf1d3efaf,643B41BE89EE,I still think that the people will cofide more in popular vote showing them that they didn't just vote for no reason. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+591f4d18935c,643B41BE89EE,Electoral college is getting more and more complicated causing people to doubt. We should change because we don't  know who the electors vote for. The Electoral College is unfair. Also because popular votes are more accurate. Electoral College is irrational and not accurate. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+998867789d8d,6481E8B9CD64,"I, PROPER_NAME, think it is best to keep the electoral colles, but here is why. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b8a550d947b3,6481E8B9CD64,"Some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the consititution is restored. The candiate must have trans regional appleal, meaning he/she must be all for each region & not just one, (South, Northeastern, etc.).  From this the residents of the other region are likelt to feel disfranchised-- to feel like their votes do not count, and that with no regard for their interests, the president is not really the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e566d5dbb54f,6481E8B9CD64,"As a citizen I would say that if the president, only did what half of the regions had said, then I would not be satisfied with what he is doing ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5953c77f3526,6481E8B9CD64,"When you go into office, you go into office for everyone, not just one region, but ALL regions. Wether or not the president haave a trans-appeal, each region does not have enough electoral votes to elect a president on their own anyway. Some say the electoral college is unfair. outdated, irrational, because they favor most daily assertions without much basis in reality. However the lectoral college, can be unfair. Most arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much base reality. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+813f333dabc3,6481E8B9CD64,"To feel as if the president is not on your side, i dont imagine that being any fun, that to me would be like rewarding one child and not the other for the same action. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c26cdc43ad08,6481E8B9CD64,"We all are equal, wether by race, color, or age. We are all human, and we demand to be treated equal, if we dont get equal, keep trying until you do. Its always too early to give up. Always push yourself to high extents just like these canidates and maybe one day it will be you standing up for the majority vote, only hoping that the voters do not pick favorites, off of location. Before you decide make sure you know who youre voting for, and that there is a chance, that folur years from now, they could be re elected again, so please, put some thought into our society, and what social conflict does to us! America hass been torn apart because, of beliefs, religion, and democracies, and possibly is still suffering from all of these things, as i sit here and type this. There is a while world out there beyond those builded lines. Why did you pick thosae  lines in the first place.         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+23d80bab49d5,649B2A197C4A,"If you were to question U.S. citizens about what an electoral college is, what would they say? Most of them don't even know its a process established in the Constitution in which electors ""vote for president and vice president,"" and then are counted by the Congress (Source 1, paragraph 1). They don't realize that their votes can be over-riden by these votes ",Lead,Effective,,,
+439a4b93794d,649B2A197C4A,"And those, if the very few, who do get it, are opposed. They would prefer another system, a more modernized system, and are disgruntle about how unfair the system is, not only about how the electors are chosen but how the larger states have an advantage in votes and in information ",Position,Effective,,,
+809d06ec7d1e,649B2A197C4A,"Most voters are opposed to such systems, according to Source Two, ""... over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now,"" (paragraph 9). Yet we still have the Electoral Colleges going. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d0ab697d1085,649B2A197C4A,"As active voters in todays society, we call for a fair system. We want, no, we need, to be treated fairly and not over-riden. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48f2a4085183,649B2A197C4A,We need a system us as people can control ourselves ,Claim,Effective,,,
+774db4d570e2,649B2A197C4A,"As in Source Two, I will ask you the question, ""Who picks the electors in the first place?"" Certainly not the citizens as a whole, most of the time its picked by the state governement in some shape or form, but sometimes, even the presidental candidates themselves can pick them (paaragraph 10)! As well as in Source Three, where its clearly pointed out that ""... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people,"" (paragraph 15). It's outragous how easily they can pull the wool over our eyes, and even worse how we let them. But no more. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+07e3b86fdb8a,649B2A197C4A,"As you probably already know, each state's ""...entitled allotment of electors equals the number of memebers in its Congressional delegation..."" (Source One, paragraph 3). Most represntatives spend most of their time campaining in places like New York and California that the small states such as Rhode Island arent even visited. ""In the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see candidates at all..."" and that campaign was refered to as a ""fiasco"" in which the Electoral College caused a dispute (Selection 2, paragraph 13).  ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8d96068367f1,649B2A197C4A,"This leaves the smaller states less informed and more likely to vote to the exact opposite of what they want, and yet they still have as much say in the vote ",Claim,Effective,,,
+29f2d3597eda,649B2A197C4A,"In Selection Three, it is said that the swing states (or larger ones) ""... are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average (and for the further reason that they will have received the most information and attention from the candidates),"" (paragraph 20).
+
+Selection Two points out something very important that should be stressed, ""... each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 5000,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 represantatives from California, who represnt 35 million votes,"" (paragraph 12). This shows the citizens aren't really being represented properly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2d63a04df82f,649B2A197C4A,"Altough many downfalls, ""The Electorial College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states... lose"" and ""avoids the problem of elections in which no one recieves a majority of the votes cast,""(Source Three, paragragh 21 and 22). ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ec0d00482e9c,649B2A197C4A,"Yet still there can be holes poked in that, and all though unlikely, theres an even amount of votes so the vote could be split 50/50. Just imagine the chaos we could be thrown into. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e79b9dc1255,649B2A197C4A,"we demand a better system, for a simplerly system, for an equal system, for a system we can control ourselves ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a94e94fadab9,650A40BBAB6D,"Twenty five years ago we discoved something different on the surface of Mars.
+
+This natrural land form looks just like a human face.
+
+Some people believe that it was created by aliens.
+
+However, that is not true. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d60a627f7668,650A40BBAB6D,"There many explanations on how this land form got there, but there is no evidence that claims it was created by aliens. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0bdaf81c303e,650A40BBAB6D,I am a scientist at NASA and I was one of the people who discovered this land form. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6e91a4e7d19,650A40BBAB6D,Although some people have very convensing stories as to how that land form got there ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3f59f19c2d8c,650A40BBAB6D,it was not made by aliens. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+839fdbdce390,650A40BBAB6D,"Many people think it is a natrural land form, while others think it was created by aliens.
+
+The team of scienctist that discoved this land have talked about how we think it got there, but one of only logical explanation is that it was hit by a meteror.
+
+Mars has lots of crators on the surface and it is just that.
+
+A crator.
+
+There is no way aliens could have made this land form.
+
+It is over two miles long. For them to make this it would have taken many of hundreds of years.
+
+I personal think that if there are any aliens they would not be an advanced civilization to create something like this. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+220c6b444448,650A40BBAB6D,Another reason why they could have never made this is how would the aliens know what a human face looks like. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d0c6b4a85ee,650A40BBAB6D,"This land form is just like they face on the moon, no one made it.
+
+It just showed up after years and years of being hit by meterors and the push and pull of gravity.
+
+Personaly I do not beleive that aliens exist.
+
+There is no evidence that they live on mars, let alone any other planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+539f4747657a,650A40BBAB6D,If they do exist I would have no problem with that ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+be469e80f30d,650A40BBAB6D,but as of right not there is no evidence that they do. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d0c00e2c9fff,650A40BBAB6D,"Even though some stories are very convensing, there is no way aliens could have made this land form.
+
+If there was more convensing evidence then I might reconsider my opinion, but as of right now there is no more evidence.
+
+So I will not be reconsidering.
+
+The land form is over two miles long which would be nearly impossible for a very underdeveloped society to create.
+
+Also how would the aliens know what a human face looks like. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc295f0c2470,650A40BBAB6D,"Therefore there is no possible way the aliens made that face, it's just a land form. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e4743e97f3d,6515C1CC0F57,the faces are just nautural land forms and not something supernatural ,Position,Adequate,,,
+66edcfae2619,6515C1CC0F57,Even Knowing that nasa wishes there was ancient people living on mars doesnt mean there actually is. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26058b6180c0,6515C1CC0F57,They may be very smart people but they have no proof that this was done by a type of living being. They clearly state that everything they get is only facts and off research and strictly that nothing else. These people who are doubting nasa abviously have no idea what there talking about if they think nasa is purposley lying to us. They say that these faces are very normal and common and that this one has very different shadowing to help it look like adifferent face. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b2945f8a6d3,6515C1CC0F57,They have shown many other faces or land forms like this in the past ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7e91a95d5e0,6515C1CC0F57,"I would understand if this was the first one and maybe that would give them a litlle reason to doubt them like they did. nasa says they have seen similair things like this on our earth. That should tell you that what is going on now isnt anything different or special to us. I understand why you would think its something crazy special but its really not, nasa them selves got all happy over nothing as well until they got another look at it.
+
+They said they thought it was something they havent seen before but it just ended up being something they really see on a ebery dat bases ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66a9a3344a8a,6515C1CC0F57,Nasa also stated that the types of cameras they used would have easily made it clear to the people that this is normal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5eb143fa299a,6515C1CC0F57,"These cameras can zoom in so close that they would have been able to see if anything moved they could see it. the only thing that was oving that day was the clouds in the sky which is normal for mars. They said they look for small stacks and things moved and even pyramids but yet nothing was abnormal about this situation. These people make even less since because if it can happen here on our normla land it should be normal for a planet like mars to do it to. Mars is the most similair planet to ours. So if it happen over here why is it so breath taking that it happens over there as well. They say that they shortly live dthis little moment and it ended up being the same old stuff, this place Cyndonia is the most common place to find these landforms shapped by who knows but they can be suspicious and very norml at the same time. They said that they think taht this face would bring much attention to mars and they were absolutly right about that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50402ad8fa73,6515C1CC0F57,"It makes sence why some poeple think different. I mean everybody has they own point of view on thuings. They wil stick to it to, they will consider them selves right still after you prove them wrong. People will always have there own perspective on things no matter what. so that means that mostly everybody will have some one that disagrees with them one way or another. Since this has opened up to the world in manny different ways, it makes it a whole lot easier to make up assumptions and nad there own way of thinking when it comes to this very starge but normal situation. Poeple have even seen thingslike this on the moon and that didnt phaze a single person. Its just people these days and how they think. they will just pull your leg. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b7e1b640b61d,653F5908B3BD,"It is highly unlikely that you will read this, but hey it is worth a shot. There are many reasons as to why the Electoral College process should be used to elect the president of the United States and many reasons as to why the popular vote process should be used. For this same purpose, there is a controversy as to which process should be used. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+eb60a0b180d1,653F5908B3BD,"If I had a say into which should be used and which should not be used, I would rule in the favor of the popular vote process and not in the favor of the Electoral College process. ",Position,Effective,,,
+c2af56665858,653F5908B3BD,"The first reason as to why I would be in favor of the popular vote process is that in the Electoral College process, big states are being more effective than small states. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+508cd276cfe0,653F5908B3BD,"This might lead the small states to not vote because they feeel that they would not make a difference. Source #3 claim the following, "" So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does...."" When bigger states have more electoral votes, the candidates will be lead to thinking that if they get the bigger states, for example California who gets 55 electoral votes, to be in their favor then they might have a bigger chance at winning which will have the small states, like Hawaii who only gets 3 electoral votes, thinking that they have no say as to who gets to be their president. This claim is supported by source #3 when it is stated, ""  Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca511d717760,653F5908B3BD,"The second reason as to why I am not in the favor of the Electoral College process is because as said in source #3, "" Voter is toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign- to really listen to the competing candidates- knowing that they are going to decide the election"" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b2f3e0d9d274,653F5908B3BD,"Candidates mostly pay attention to states that have more electoral votes, this causes them to pay more attention to the bigger states and leave out the smaller ones, as already argued, some states get more electoral votes than others. Another reason why this is bad is because most states will not pay attention in the election because they will not make a difference. If popular vote were to be in action, then more people and citizens will pay attention because it will be a more interesting election since more epeople have a say and the candidates will pay attention to all states. Even the bigger states with more electoral votes know that they are the ones to basically decide the election. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b954b0f79803,653F5908B3BD,"The popular vote process is more effective and fair for the United States in choosing the President. Most people can argue in that favor as well. If you qwant the elections to be fair, I supposwe that you will pay attention to the voice of thousands of citizens and you will be fair.                         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0c076f0b0bd7,656C7C849144,"When electing the president of the United States, you must vote in favor of the president you want. However, instead of coming down to popular vote, the system uses the Electrolar College to decide. The Electroral Vote works in that the people of a certain states votes for their candidate and the majority of people who vote for a certain president give their votes to a slate of voters. What this means is that the popular vote within a state wins the electoral votes of the electors who then vote for the president. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d26ea60a1e0e,656C7C849144,Many people dislike this system including myself. ,Position,Effective,,,
+71a36e346855,656C7C849144,I disaprove of this system because it limits representation ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a533d0dd9ed8,656C7C849144,permits the disintrest of voters ,Claim,Effective,,,
+38ad2025648e,656C7C849144,reduces a candidates intrest in a state. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4a1887ffd3ea,656C7C849144,One major problem with the Electoral College voting system is that it limits representation of the people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+46aa25933049,656C7C849144,"The Electoral COllege votes work so that the population of a state directly effects the amount of votes that states recieves. For example, Wyoming only has about 500,000 voters so it only recieves one electoral college vote. Because there is only one vote for wyoming, the 500,000 voters do not have acurate representation in a vote that has a total of 270 electoral votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+91f855256105,656C7C849144,There have also been times in which a president has won the piopular vote but lost the Electoral College vote. This was seen in the 2000 vote of Bush versus Gore when Gore won the popular vote and Bush won the electoral vote. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+abddbcc622ba,656C7C849144,"One might claim that because the amount of electoral votes for a state is based of the population, it is fair. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+500e06e54ed9,656C7C849144,"However, I believe that the popular vote is more fair because it expresses the opinion of the majority. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+f38cebb8cc72,656C7C849144,"In some states, there is a large majority of people running for a single party. This can be observed primarily in Texas where an overwhelming majority of voters are Republican. Therefore, the Republican president wins Texas almost every election period. This can be frustrating for Democrats who live in Texas because they know that ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+54e238f9794c,656C7C849144,their vote does not matter causing them to lose interest in voting in the first place. This is not fair for those people nor is it particularly good to express as an American trait. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+83605133a650,656C7C849144,"As stated before, the larger the population of a states, the more Electoral College votes that state gets. This leads to a small group of ""big states"" that have such a large amount of votes, they are the target for candidates to try to persuade to vote for them. On the opposite side of the spectrum, most of the other 50 states have a smaller amount of votes and are less of an objective for candidates to acquire. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af118abd9b4d,656C7C849144,In many states throughout an election preiod (the period in which candidates move to diferent states giving speeches) the candidates never make an appearance in their state at all. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2334f477a9c4,656C7C849144,This is observed in the 2000 election in which seventeen states did not have the candidate make an appearance at all. This also can lower interest in voting for the president. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+800b1f58288c,656C7C849144,"The Electoral college voting system is not fair in the way the present system works. The system does not show proper representation of the people, does not promote interest in voting, and causes a candidate to ignore the states in which do not have a large amount of electoral votes. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+709301ccbcb0,6578E97B8E0E,"I recently heard you wanted to change the school policy on sports and other activities, so that only students with a grade average of a B or higher can participate. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b89f1208cb65,6578E97B8E0E,"i think this is wrong, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4670635e2584,6578E97B8E0E,students won't have as many after school activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b7d8758ac20,6578E97B8E0E,"After school activities help occupy students time which makes it less likely for them to get in trouble.
+
+Another reason is that students might also drop out or move schools so they can continue playing sports.
+
+If students don't have sports they are also less likely to get enough exercise which could cause more obesity in the school.
+
+Some students rely on sports as a chance to spend time with their friends, so if sports are cut out they may become antisocial and have no friends. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e16d11b1da42,6578E97B8E0E,When people play sports it also makes them more motivated to do other things and gain more friendships. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a5cd42fb046a,6578E97B8E0E,"Other activities in which students may not be able to participate in such as electives or school clubs may drop the self esteem of students due to lack of friends with similar interests.
+
+this rule might also cause bullying because if someone can't play sports then others will know they have less than a B average.
+
+Getting regular physical activity in a friendly surrounding also helps people who might have had a troubled past.
+
+When others around to support one and other it also brings up the moods of possibly depressed people.
+
+When activities are available it also helps students broaden their horizon by letting them try things they might not have otherwise tried.
+
+it also allows students to meet people with similar interests. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9378f91f598,6578E97B8E0E,This policy might also be good because it would give students with poor grades a reason to bring their grades up to atleast a B average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e294f2f09f0f,6578E97B8E0E,"It also could allow there to be more academic centered clubs.
+
+The students who aren't eligible to play sports could also have tutors in the time they aren't spending on sports. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f30efefb494,65922C6DA1B8,"Times are changing. Driverless car technology is being created, with slow and steady progress. The technology for these type of cars has only been developed over the last few years because of a lack of technology. There are several companies trying to develop these cars, but they're pretty much at the same step. Knowing how driverless technology works, who is liable for damages, and how it will effect drivers is crucial to the possible future use of driverless cars. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+3acb9227716a,65922C6DA1B8,"Driverless technology has to be understood by the consumer. If the consumer does not know how this technology works, it could cause some serious damage. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+7508fab46ee0,65922C6DA1B8,"The consumer has to realize that driverless cars aren't completely driverless, the consumer has to know that they have to remain attentive while being in the driver's seat. ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents."" (Driverless Cares Are Coming paragraph 7). Without the realization that they have to be attentive, some bad accidents could occur. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77b905aa1e97,65922C6DA1B8,Liability for the accidents caused by driverless cars has to be settled. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ab311d3bb400,65922C6DA1B8,"The companies that make the driverless cars, or the driver, it is yet to be determined who would be at fault. The company for making flawed technology, or the driver for being in the car. ""Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturere?"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming paragraph 9). This will be a huge issue if driverless cars do become legal. Driverless cars could effect the people in more way than one. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec098e24bce8,65922C6DA1B8,"The effect of drivers in the future if cars become driverless. Their is a great possibility of issues coming with driverless cars, some subtle, and some severe. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+759eeec2b245,65922C6DA1B8,"Also, who would want a driverless car if you still had to driver it? That does defeat the purpose of the name of the car. ""Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming paragraph 8). Being occupied while sitting there is imperative. People will become bored if they have to just sit in the seat all day long. Companies have to come of with entertainment systems, but an issue with that is losing attention. While being in the driver's seat of a driverless car, being attentive is imperative. There may be situations where the car cannot handle it, and it requires human skills. ""This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires."" (Driverless Cars Are Coming paragraph 7). There is a double whammy right there. Companies have to balance out occupying the driver and keeping them attentive; but there is no way to be distracted and attentive at the same time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+288a6ad48075,65922C6DA1B8,The risks involved with driverless cars are way to high for the potential payoff ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e48d95fa8543,65922C6DA1B8,"The technology that is being developed might have a future, but in the near future, there is no way it'll work. Right now, they aren't even driverless cars, the cars still require a driver. Surely there will be progress on that aspec of the cars. Just simple knowing how the cars work is the first obsticle. Also, being able to figure out who is liable for damages between the manufacturer, or the driver of the car is a huge issue that comes with this. Lastly, how it will effect future driver's skills, and attentiveness while driving. Will there be a future in this industry, or not? Only time will tell.          ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f2142ce3a5a8,659461FD20E3,Dear senator i was wondering what the electoral college was. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+45bfc772e823,659461FD20E3,And iv noticed that its unfair ,Position,Adequate,,,
+69e7cabbf0f0,659461FD20E3,Because of the winner-take-all system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b94ebce499c,659461FD20E3,the posablet of a tie. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c78443912cd,659461FD20E3,Which is when candates dont spend time in state they know there not going to win. For example in the 2000 campaign seventeen states didnt get to see who they where even voting for. And some of the largest media markets didnt see a campaign ad. Ever one should at least get to see who mit be running the U.S.A. If the president was picked on most poppler vote the people would see who there voting for and also see what there are plans are for the U.S. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db9e2a3a0979,659461FD20E3,"Many people are worried about this because the responablaite of chocing the president would be the house of represantives. Which is unfair because each state has only one vote. For example let say florida represenates 400,000 people, they would have as much to say to texas who represenates 1 millon people. But if the president was chocien by polpular vote then there could never be a tie and voter would have a changes to vote for who they really want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fbb4d82283d,659461FD20E3,All and all the electrol college should be changed. Because of the winner takes all system and the posablet of tie. The college has worked for a long time now but i think the american people are ready for a change. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+048e663acdfe,65991D1DA389,"I think that, policy number one is genius. You should let the students bring there phones during free periods and lunch periods. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ea75b33c79ed,65991D1DA389,When your phone is turned on someone can call you or text you. you don't have to be using your phone for you to get a call or a message. It should not be on during class time. Class time is learning time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2f8bb740859,65991D1DA389,All teens can think about is staying on the phone all the time. Technology has taken over the young minds of teens over the past few years. Not many people take to others face to face anymore. There some people that say they can not live without the uses of technology. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b5742c6eebb,65991D1DA389,"During the lunch periods, everyone talks to each other while eating, so why not have the usage of a cell phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dbca6e0bfeeb,65991D1DA389,For such a small device it can distract many people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+362b4a61189c,65991D1DA389,If they are not turned off during the class time it will beep or make a noise that will stop the learning process of class time. There is a time for fun and there is time for learning. Class time is for learning. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9868677983b3,65991D1DA389,The policy should also apply for teachers too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3087ff905cda,65AB218C2765,The face on mars is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c15e3a92d80e,65AB218C2765,Mars has plenty of landforms and its normal for landforms to creat a shape or face. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a982b13743b8,65AB218C2765,"Just because it makes a face on a planet doesn't mean aliens had anything to do with it. Under paragraph 5 you see a photograph of the face and many landforns surrounding it, so as you can see many landforms stand out on Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8da758daa8f0,65AB218C2765,"In paragraph 3 it says (shadoes gave the landform eyes,a mouth,and nose) ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e4c35a10e47,65AB218C2765,"so its a landform with a face but the shadows make up the face. NASA has been studying this for a long time,but for what ?, as you bcan see its just a landform not a face. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8cb1213b6dfb,65AB218C2765,In paragraph 7 it clearly says(thousands of web surfers were waiting when the image on the JPL website but when it appeared it revealed just a natural landform.). There was no momument after all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cf217e8e421,65AB218C2765,"So in conclusion with this evidence, you can clearly see that its just a landform and not a alien monument. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e2b9ae58208d,65C8F881F296,This idea of not letting students participate in sports or other activities unless they have a grade B average is just bologna. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4fc209809edf,65C8F881F296,"Every students deserves the right to have a fun time with friends, get excersize, and be healthy by participating in a sport or other activity at school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18f51a67b31d,65C8F881F296,"Athletic ability should not be based on smarts, because a person who is a fantastic athlete could be getting all C' s in their classes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cb1891b6559,65C8F881F296,"Many kids only enjoy playing sports or being in school activities like school dances, fundraises, field trips, etc. Taking away these rights to the children with grade C averages and above is just plain cruel. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c2dd91e294b2,65C8F881F296,In my opinion every student deserves the right to be involved in school activities as long as they keep an above grade D average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f747fbeed9ae,65C8F881F296,"Many students have a grade C average, but that is not their fault if that is the only grade they are able to get. If a student who doesn't have a grade B average wants to play a sport or join in an activity at school and enjoy it, wont be able to because of one class that is bringing their grade down. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43273f28a3c7,65C8F881F296,"If students have a grade C average or below, the school's job should be to help this student in getting better grades and keeping those grades. To strip away the students activities could leave them angry, mad, and wanting to rebel. Let's keep the school policy at a grade C average and keep everyone happy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+56865387196b,65D771A9D1FD,"School is a requirement for all children and young adults in the country, so distance learning would be beneficial to any students who are unable to attend. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7aae8f7d9d2f,65D771A9D1FD,Reasons for this include mental and physical disabilities that may inhibit a child from experiencing a normal and comforting education ,Claim,Effective,,,
+55121f12e219,65D771A9D1FD,"allows those who are sick or unable to attend certain days the opportunity to not fall behind, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+80b8ef057d1b,65D771A9D1FD,would make attending class easier by not requiring students to wake up as early as they do and prepare for school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+97da989f12dc,65D771A9D1FD,"As all humans and creatures on earth do, people will inevitably get sick. Because of this, students could miss crucial education and fall behind, creating a lull in their schedule as well as lowering their grades ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+02c6cdca5ca2,65D771A9D1FD,". By creating a system where students are able to work from home, unforeseen events such as an illness or injury will not be as great of a setback as before. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+276508e62ab7,65D771A9D1FD,"From personal experience, only missing two days made a scenario where I had missed multiple tests, a plethora of notes and information, and in class assignments that I would end up turning in late, all while trying to complete the current work as well. While it does seem like a benefit to just skip the day to get better, walking to a computer and working from home does not require much work at all and would serve to be much more beneficial than missing a day of school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+747f24b9c252,65D771A9D1FD,"Online learning can be either part time or full time, and thus if a full time online attendance is set in place, it would make attending class that much easier. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+58408a787f14,65D771A9D1FD,"By attending class online, students do not have to deal with the daily chores of waking up early, preparing for school, and in many cases rushing to leave in order to not be late. Being tardy for a class can be severely punished even if it was not directly the students fault, which could lower productivity and motivation. It is widely known that students complain about this dilemma already, and with online learning, it can be solved in a simple and cost effective way. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bde09e22dbe4,65D771A9D1FD,"Opposition to this idea might say that the social aspect of school is as important as education itself, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a8339097626d,65D771A9D1FD,"yet this is not the reason for attending school, for it is to learn and prepare for college, adult life, and work. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+eed5c196a642,65D771A9D1FD,"Mental and physical disabilities are far spread greatly varied, and create situations where it is harder to preform physical tasks, learn, or even communicate with others in society. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6a872ff91fb0,65D771A9D1FD,"This causes a problem where it becomes difficult to attend school effectively, either due to the stress or confusion created by other students, or the literal inability to preform satisfactory and participate in certain activities. Certain students with autism, asbergers syndrome, etc, may find it extremely stressful to forcefully attend an environment where they are exposed to peer pressure, bullying, and sometimes harassment. Individuals with certain physical limitations such as being crippled or wheelchair bound may find it hard if not impossible to engage in activities such as sports, or even any activity that requires a major amount of movement. As somebody who has a family member with autism, I see the effects of going through this environment, and hear the many complaints and ways it upsets him every day. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a26ef1f82f24,65D771A9D1FD,"While it might be possible for physically handicapped people to find a way to work around their problem, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+97f63de97ce9,65D771A9D1FD,"people with mental disabilities will almost always attend some kind of specialized learning in school, which even then has flaws from being in school. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dee1af22302d,65D771A9D1FD,"Through online learning, these students can be given the opportunity to flourish in society through a comfortable environment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8254301a22bc,65D771A9D1FD,"The previously stated reasons reflect upon the need for online and distance learning to be more widely spread in this country. In doing so, many new opportunities will be created while making solutions to many challenges in every day life. All aspects and corners of life will be able to cope with school and their own education plans to make a future that benefits them and the rest of the world. Stress would most likely be lower than its current average in the student age group, and national grade averages would see a rise. This change could make the United States a more economically successful country due to higher education rates and success in schools, and make it look better as a whole.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+526e78e0852d,65E50A262677,"Community service is something people do voluntary, not something that should be required. ",Position,Effective,,,
+61f6120f13e1,65E50A262677,"Students have other things to worry about such as studying, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+69f1746e238d,65E50A262677,"homework, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+270669ede609,65E50A262677,chores ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b075e371d006,65E50A262677,"There is already a lot of adults who volunteer for community service, and there's people who by law are forced to. Kids on the other hand shouldn't have to. Students don't need something else on their shoulders, school is for learning and nothing else. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+059fb2e40462,65E50A262677,"Already there is many students who don't study at all, and making all students do community service would discourage the small percentage who do. Doing things like cleaning and taking care of younger kids can be tiring. Even adults get tired of doing these things, imagine how a minor would feel. When a student is tired and has the choice to study or not they would most likely rather not; well after so much work they have just done. Not studying can lower test scores, and not to mention lower student grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bde6a987b5ee,65E50A262677,"Of course, those who choose to volunteer for community service find their way; they figure out their own schedule. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ce3630a49e58,65E50A262677,"But what about those new goer's? A change of schedule can be very frustrating, especially when it means doing your homework late at night. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5b460b83df99,65E50A262677,"There's another reason why it could affect the use of homework. When you have such a tight schedule (which can be harder to those who play sports or clubs) your only option is to do your homework at night. Which is really bad because students end up having less hours of sleep, which is required for a good healthy day. Homework should be done right after school, but with this new task it wouldn't be possible. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4713e36e656c,65E50A262677,"Parents as we all know are very strict about chores, and when a kid doesn't accomplish them, parents can get really mad. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca3c965bd207,65E50A262677,Of course you can prevent that by actually doing them in first place, ,Counterclaim,Effective,,
+ab4b76512b13,65E50A262677,"but what if you have to community service first? Your parents might understand the situation you in, so they'll probably post pone ""clean up"" day to the week end. Which is the only days a student has to forget about their troubles at school. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+92fa8b5d00c0,65E50A262677,"There's another reason, socially this would ruin social activity after school; ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0afc715798f4,65E50A262677,"since students have to study, do their homework, and do their chores all before bed time. Chores is enough, why do city chores the community already volunteers for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5f0011d8793,65E50A262677,"In conclusion, i believe the idea of making students do community service is absurd and completely irrational. Students have social lives they need to fulfill. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3052c6b2ad08,65E50A262677,Our tax money is going to the cause anyway so why bother. People get payed for this stuff so it shouldn't be a privilege. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+09a252b32014,6614342DF86D,I honestly think that student should be required to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+28f7bbed5744,6614342DF86D,"Students have enough time out of the day to atleast help an elderly person across the street. I help my mom go around and pick up trash every Saturday.
+
+You know if we picked up all the trash we throw down we could have a lot of garbage ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+205c518a3cc7,6614342DF86D,People around the community could help by atleast caring about others because it would just brighten up everyone's day ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf607ef8be28,6614342DF86D,"Students should have to say good morning and have a big smile on their face when they walk in the classroom.
+
+I encourage my friends to be happy with everyone because they might need that person one day ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc4af26fe5a0,6614342DF86D,"Anyways if you really think about it we could make the world a better place, if we all stick together and help save the planet by doing the community services we are required ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+450e8b973fd0,6614342DF86D,"I think that the students today are worried about sports, and not being able to help the community because of these jobs. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d34055f8fc7e,6614342DF86D,Helping the people in South Carolina is better than any sport or video game. Those things don't help our state become beautiful helping the community is. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c52276bb3e01,6614342DF86D,It's sad when you see all that garbage when you go somewhere beautiful on vacation. It makes me not want to go anymore after that ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e141087c9a5,6614342DF86D,So think about what we can do to make our community a better place by making the students clean up. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39e4d7e67f0a,6614342DF86D,"T he world isn't going to get better by sitting down and watching tv all day. Next time you see a student litter make them pick it up and give them a warning about our safety. I don't want to wake up one day and be surrounded by garbage. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c7d289d31ac6,6621856784A9,I think you should allow the students to bring their cell phones because of security reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fd89567b4aff,6621856784A9,Lots of parents have a lot of concerns about where their child is and should be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2abfe669c007,6621856784A9,"In today's world our parents have many fears for safety. What there was a tornado and it rips the school's telephone lines. Students with cell phones can call their guardians and alert them to come pick them up. Students with no cell phones will have to wait a while for new communication methods, imagine the look on their parents faces when they get to the school and make a scandal about why didn't their child call and tell them that they were okay. Think if there was somebody hurt badly and every second counted was a second closer to death. Now who would call if the power lines were down and the students don't have cell phones. Well you may say that maybe the whole administration had cell phones, maybe the teachers too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a6c3d12e7a7,6621856784A9,"But some may get lost or broken, maybe they don't have a got telephone service. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+92fc2d8f1fc0,6621856784A9,In a case of emergency you need as much communication ways as possible. So think about it and think about the future needs and chose carefully. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+41dc913ee788,6641EA903719,Some of the other students and I do not think that it is fair for you to acquire all of the students to do community service without us accepting. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd008032b2f1,6641EA903719,For example some of the other students parents may not allow their kids to do community service because they probably have chores at home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a57c2b7d30ca,6641EA903719,"The student may have a younger sibling and may have to watch them after school or during the weekend.
+
+Other possibilities is that the students may have another job for extra money like babysitting or the student may have a lot of things on his mind such as projects for school or something and may be more focused on that than the community service itself. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99ca130cf0d7,6641EA903719,Some of the students may not feel responsible enough for it and may think he wont do good enough or they will fail the task. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65255d5c90db,6641EA903719,I also think that the students will want to choose if they want to do community service or not ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02d887cba79e,6641EA903719,i know that you especially don't want the students to go on strike and skip class on to go on strike against the principle of our school and get suspended or expelled or anything like that. Also if you could make an announcement about doing something else like help out or give some new ideas for our school like school dances or a fundraiser for our school and get new school supplies for our budget and everything like that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cdf7f86891d3,6641EA903719,I hope this letter has changed your mind on making the school do community service and let kids choose if they want to or not ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d07d13bf832,6661EAEC9023,"I strongly support policy 1, which allows students to bring and use their cell phones during school as long as they are turned off in class ",Position,Adequate,,,
+32f97ff4036c,6661EAEC9023,Students have the right to use their cell phones during lunch and other free times ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68e80940b954,6661EAEC9023,"With applying this policy, students do not have to suffer to try and hide their cell phones during class. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e21a774c509,6661EAEC9023,"It is also good for the teachers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73a50f4bef97,6661EAEC9023,without this policy teachers may have to stop lessons and talk to other students trying to text in class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3430dca324cb,6661EAEC9023,students have a free right to use cell phones during any free period of time and don't have to worry about teachers catching them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+767c3b941259,6661EAEC9023,"Although I would advise all teachers, before class to check every students' cell phone to make sure they are completely turned off and put away. This also includes the librarian checking for students cell phones also. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+520663062736,6661EAEC9023,"This policy also rewards some students who work hard in school, and deserve the usage of their phone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e32352484c5c,6661EAEC9023,"If you put this policy to good use, you, as the principal can find out what really is going on around the school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6332ce24fb8,6661EAEC9023,Getting updates from students talking about the latest news and what is soon going to happen. The teachers would also get many updates from their own students at what has been going on. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29f9ed87ad20,6661EAEC9023,"If needed, you, the principal has the right to check their cell phones for any purpose necessary and can confiscate them. Policy 1 can be put to good use if you imply some kind of other rules if needed too. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+021e90ae1d19,666D50D7F0F0,"Well on my opinion I don't think the face is a natural landform, ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+2c676d511f9b,666D50D7F0F0,in the text it states- twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0deba170cca0,666D50D7F0F0,"If the face has been apart of Mars for ONLY twenty five years I don't think is was apart of martian life, it would've already been discovered a long time ago. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4075ce24f02c,666D50D7F0F0,I honestly think it has been made up by an illusion. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d78e1490371f,666D50D7F0F0,"Stated in paragraph three, NASA uveiled the image for all to see, it was a huge rock formation, which resmebled an humans head making out the shaped of nose, eyes, and mouth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+acd81035d80f,666D50D7F0F0,They thought reasoning this situation of Mars would be a great way to grab the public's attention to Mars. It did. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12e51730e9fb,666D50D7F0F0,"Ever since then it has became an pop icon, so now that i think about it, It does'nt seem like it was apart of martian life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+661c404138f8,666D50D7F0F0,They so far haven't even caught real martian life on planet Mars. So I don't even know how to think that NASA could determine it was apart of alien life on Mars. It possibly could be but I don't think anything could live on the surface of that COLD planet. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c496b533a0a5,666D50D7F0F0,"It puzzles me that it just randomly popped up out of nowhere and has been located at that very spot for twenty five years, why could this happen now? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0ccd22963ed,666D50D7F0F0,I don't know maybe later in discovery the scientists of NASA will find out what and why this happened. NASA's budget wished there was an ancient civilization on Mars. I guess we'll have to find out later in the future. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+67e6a2a6c240,666D50D7F0F0,"The ""Face on Mars"" has been starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, articles, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2f9ea9b2330d,666D50D7F0F0,"Now you know why people are so amazed of being able to read about this story and give NASA so much feedbacks about this ""Face on Mars"" story. One day they'll determine what'll happen. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+300fb0bb6cb1,6699DEA066F3,"There are schools that offer distance learning for students so that they can work in their homes on computers. Online learning can be beneficial to the student for health reasons or personal reasons; however, sometimes distance learning is not as beneficial as the classroom experience. There are many aspects of a physical classroom that online students will miss out on. Online classes can be simple for the student, but the simplicity of online learning is not enough for the education of the student ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6f89aae2f138,6699DEA066F3,Even though online classes can make students feel comfortable with working on their own time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+45dab82cb4ed,6699DEA066F3,classroom instruction is more beneficial to students than online classes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1971d84ea43a,6699DEA066F3,"because it helps students gain social experience with their peers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1d95ce83571,6699DEA066F3,"helps students communicate easily with their teachers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1be9b411bfee,6699DEA066F3,and helps students remember lesson material better with physical experience. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4469edc0400e,6699DEA066F3,Online learning can be beneficial to the student when it comes to students' individual schedules. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+542205e0ed5e,6699DEA066F3,"There are students have jobs, have lots of homework, and have emergencies, so online classrooms can benefit these students because online learning can allow the student to work on their own pace. For example, if a student has a death in the family, the student should take time off from school to mourn and attend services. If that student missed classroom taught classes, the learning experience the student missed cannot be brought back since the entire class as whole moves on through a designated schedule, and the student would have much work to catch up on in little time. But, if the student was taking online classes and missed multiple classes, the student would only worry little in comparison to a classroom student. Since online classes allow students to work on their own time, the student with the family emergency can always catch up whenever he is done with his personal business and he does not have to worry about other classmates' progress in the class. That way, online learning can be beneficial to the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+868f05594be8,6699DEA066F3,"However, the social experience between a student and his peers in the classroom can help the student grow as an individual with good social skills. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d0d25daacfc8,6699DEA066F3,"In the classroom, there must be some communication between the students. For instance, communication among the students is present when the teacher assigns group work. In group projects, such as PowerPoint presentations, Google Slides presentations, dioramas, posters, and videos, students need to work together to complete the assignment. Through this experience, students can create good communication skills with each other and make friends comfortably. This characteristic of the physical classroom cannot be found in a digital classroom. In a digital classroom, students do not see other peers in person, making communication harder. Also, students do not know what is happening behind the screen with other students. Students may mistakenly distort communication with each other, eventually ruining peer relationships. Learning social skills from the classroom will help students' social skills in the outside world, so it is important that students take the physical route to classroom learning rather than online learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+02eed70924d0,6699DEA066F3,Student communication with the teacher becomes easier when the student is in a classroom rather than in an online class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+feb341256d30,6699DEA066F3,"In a physical classroom, the teacher is usually present and is easily accessible, but in an online class, the teacher is not always there when a student needs them; the student would have to rely on sending an email or sending a message through a school-sponsored online chat and wait for a response. The waiting time can range from seconds to hours, or perhaps, days, depending on the teacher's schedule. For example, in the summer, a student may take an online class for economics and personal finance. There would be a time where the student would need to ask a proctor a question about the testing rules, so in that situation, he would email and wait for a response before the test date. However, the student received an email regarding testing rules after the test date. In situations like this, there is uncertainty in determining when the proctor will respond since the student does not know exactly when the proctor is online; but, in a classroom, this scenario would not happen. Because the student is face to face with the teacher, he gets an immediate response. This makes the situation much easier and stress free for the student. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+81211f4fd287,6699DEA066F3,Physical experience can help students learn better in a class than on a computer. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f88e1a3c1ef3,6699DEA066F3,"Online, the student is limited to a screen with lesson materials on it. Also, schools and teachers are limited to adding documents, websites, and tests online. Because of these limits, the online experience feels dull and straightforward with tests and documents. In a physical classroom, there are lectures, models, posters, and hands-on activities available to the student. These physical resources can help a student remember class materials better through the unique experience they would go through. Unlike the online learning experience, a physical learning experience is flexible and fun to the student. A computer will fail to produce these resources to the students because of its limited functionality from technology. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aad0c391b7a9,6699DEA066F3,"
+Classroom taught classes are more beneficial to students rather than online classes because of the social skills students attain, the simple communication the students have with teachers, and the memorable physical experience the students gain. These significant differences in physcial classrooms and online classrooms should be taken into consideration by many schools when deciding whether or not they should offer online classes. Technology should not be overused by schools in the age of modern technology; otherwise, modern students will lose the social skills and educational benefits a classroom would have brought. Classroom-based classes will benefit the future of students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d6e4f7debae,669C59404DC1,"The Electoral College is a process by which we vote for electors- not actually the president themself. When you vote for the electors, they decide who will be the president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0a420b8b1b16,669C59404DC1,"We, as voters, have a right to be able to vote for whomever we choose; not someone to choose for us. We should change the Electoral College to election by popular vote ",Position,Effective,,,
+f1bb626d5a3d,669C59404DC1,because it gives the people a say in who runs our country ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13fc361d7d8d,669C59404DC1,an easier way to elect persons into office ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f6fc47b4977,669C59404DC1,"and no one state has more of a say. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f612a790e25,669C59404DC1,"Many poeple believe that we are voting for the president when we vote for our electors, but in reality, we are voting for them to vote ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+988ea3a96cf4,669C59404DC1,"We, as the people of the United States of America, have always had the right to freedom (freedom of speech, religion, ect.)- so why don't we have the freedom to directly choose our president? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2f4fd1f3495d,669C59404DC1,Most think that if we have electors we won't have as much trouble getting a person in office. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3e9b927b7542,669C59404DC1,"In the eleventh paragraph, in 'Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral Coolege: Why even the best-laid defences of the system are wrong', under 'What's wrong with the electoral college', its speaks of a ""disaster factor"". The ""disaster factor"" is when we vote for electors and they defy the will of the people; as this had almost happened with segregationists, nearly making the popular vote for Kennedy not go to Kennedy. As well as the fact that we could easily of had a tie in the electoral vote. As it says in the second source, the matter would fall into the hands of the House of Representatives ""...the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president."" This means each state has one vote, meaning the will of the people wouldn't have much say in the election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1df3516e7d84,669C59404DC1,"People in a state all have the same electors, made by a popular vote, practically taking away the people's voice. If things were to change to popular vote we would all have a say in each election. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+154d20bf3201,669C59404DC1,"In the Electoral College way of voting, it is ""...unfair to voters. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state."" Along with the fact that in the Electoral College way, the amount of electors is based on population, making the people of a small state insignifigant. ""During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the canidates at all..."" If all small states stay this way, they may never be able to have a say in any big decision made by the public. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+170fd2c582fd,669C59404DC1,"In conclusion, we, as the people of the United States of America, need to inderstand that the road we are headed down with the Electoral College, is not a good road. We need to stand up and allow everyone to be able to have a say in elections. With the popular vote every citizen will have they're own say in what gets made of our beautiful country. We, the people, need to make the change from Electoral College voting to popular vote becauseit gives people a say in who runs our country, an eaier way to elect someone into office, and no one state has more of a say than another. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+681e9dbba676,66BB82BD76B2,"Am I against or for the driverless cars? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5f35f36e327f,66BB82BD76B2,I in my opinion am against having driverless cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+94da6720eeb4,66BB82BD76B2,I love to drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad10f6b61935,66BB82BD76B2,I injoy driving and going in and out of plces. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4ced1737ebe,66BB82BD76B2,havind driverless cars could be a big terrible deal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+51bf2d27d9f5,66BB82BD76B2,"For example , the car has a mind of its own but what if some day it has a glich and you are inside the car, the glich will seel the doors and windows. When you know the whay to go, turning right at a stop but the glich or mistake it makes the auto go to the left. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b09cf855d9ef,66BB82BD76B2,"I would not like to be lazy and not learn the street names or where my destination. The driverless cars learn everything for you, how are you going to invite a friend from outside who does not have a drierless car. You cannot help your friend get to the destination if you do not know the streets or dirrection to go to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4c6cee31b61,66BB82BD76B2,"I for sure am against the driverless cars.
+
+Are you against having the drverless cars or do you agree for them? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1d37dd7c3ab9,66D810E0A3D1,I think the second policy is better ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a399f8890811,66D810E0A3D1,if you have your phone available your really tempted to use it not just during lunch. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a299ef4e3c02,66D810E0A3D1,But the first reason is also good cause there are some kids who would be able to restrain them self as well. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+40fe4b2191fc,66D810E0A3D1,Kids would always try to text during class and on test if they were allowed to use there phone during lunchan ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55efd94e1e0f,66D810E0A3D1,Kids would also start thinking about doing it a lot more sense they no they can bring it to school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ab5b8c6f0c6,66D810E0A3D1,But saying phones aren't allowed would not be fair because of the good kids who use when allowed. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5dc9dca99a4a,66D810E0A3D1,"The ones who use it after school for rides home or talk to their friends. It just depends on the school and the students. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70dd4ab3d3f0,66D810E0A3D1,The principle should ask the teachers to see how many phones they see out or taken away ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a1039517fef,66D810E0A3D1,If the numbers are high than go with the second policy But if the numbers are low then go with the first policy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2dd8b454afe2,66D810E0A3D1,"Like i said depends on the school and the students, ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3a9fa1f026ed,66E83D44F4A3,"Juding by this artical ""Does the Electoral College Work?"",  readers would agree that electoral colleges should be changed. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d72f5cb7ec92,66E83D44F4A3,"This artical explains what electoral colleges are, how they help voting, and how they are bad. These three things give the reader the opion about this artical. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4ba476d2ca9,66E83D44F4A3,"Source one ""What is the Electoral College Work? "" by the Office of the Federal Register explains what an electoral college is "" The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ea9e6b8864a,66E83D44F4A3,The founding fathers intended to help with elections but later people want it to go away so their votes matter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+114d9e1950e6,66E83D44F4A3,"Since electoral colleges have been formed they have been disliked because they are thought of as ""an anachronism, and a non-democratic method of selecting a president"". Another is ""The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"". In most of the passage it talks about how the readers demise the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86ff09474d24,66E83D44F4A3,"To sum up this passage the readers would agree electoral colleges are unwanted, and not need. This is supported by many quotes in all of the sources. The best quote to prove this point is "" Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense ... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people.                                                                                  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cadcc67d1b77,66EEDB0C0494,Many students would benefit from attending classes at home. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0dbf459f7e61,66EEDB0C0494,"School is a very chaotic place and students suffer from many things on a day to day basis from bullying, interruptions from staff, teachers, and even other students ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+22a14b842189,66EEDB0C0494,The students would love the idea since they can learn at their own pace ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af678d922cf1,66EEDB0C0494,be able to focus and get their work done ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19cfedeb00e2,66EEDB0C0494,"A lot of things can happen to the student if they were to stay in school.
+
+Majority of students that attend any type of school suffer from anxiety, pressure, and many other things. Having them in a quiet area would help them out a lot so they can refrain from any distractions or anything else that can interrupt their school work and make them feel overwhelmed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d58e755347d,66EEDB0C0494,With the student staying home they will have a better surrounding and environment at home rather than being at school with all of the chaotic things that happen there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebf0f890ec86,66EEDB0C0494,One on one time would also benefit the student with a massive impact. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9c58d0d2512,66EEDB0C0494,"Students often get irritated with the fact that teachers would have a line of students asking for questions but their question is far more important. With the student being at home they could get that question answered right then and there without them having to wait minutes for their question be answered. Even questions that are outside of school and the question is urgent, it could help the student out a lot since they may not feel comfortable talking to their parent about it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6dff3879d47,66EEDB0C0494,Parents believe that a student would rather benefit from going to school and doing the work rather than staying at home and doing their classes there. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0f509ea77204,66EEDB0C0494,"However, there are many possibilities and dangers outside of home that can ruin the students experience going to school and doing their classes there ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cba177f53c5a,66EEDB0C0494,Students staying at home would not only benefit the student but also the parents since the outside world especially school can be a scary place. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab2c8621e02e,66EEDB0C0494,"Having classes at home is a very big step for the schools but it can be done and it would make a huge impact to the students and the parents.
+
+If a student did not feel comfortable with the school environment having them be at home in their space, and area it could show a lot of postive results to other parents and students. Students wouldn't have to feel groggy in the morning or be late to any class since they could just be at home and take everything at their own pace with a specific time end date of course. Having classes at home instead of going to school would be a big difference in the world today.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8df714e2d7ce,66FE148BE39B,The Electoral College is a compromise between the election of the President by electoral votes. This has been around for as long as I can remember. It plays a very big part in our government.  Some people want to get rid of it. Others don't. Do you think we should keep the it? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b413e6aa352c,66FE148BE39B,The Electoral College balances out the amount of popular votes. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+b9148acd26ed,66FE148BE39B,"If both candidates are tied, we turn to the state electors. The candidate that has the biggest amount of electoral votes wins. One candidate can have more popular votes and very few electoral votes. The popular votes are just for the state electors to decide which they are going to pick. In the end it all goes down to them, The Electoral College, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+95215b9b8292,66FE148BE39B,"On the other hand, some people don't like this idea. The electors are sometimes depend on the state. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d041da30f15d,66FE148BE39B,"Other times the state conventions, the presidential candidates, and sometimes the sate party's central committee. Voters think it's unfair. They spend a bunch of time voting for who THEY want, but in the end it comes down to the electors. So in reality it doesn't even matter who the voters choose. They really just choose a slate of electors, who then elect the president, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a33abb1fa2af,66FE148BE39B,I think we should get rid of The Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4c2c452a80a3,66FE148BE39B,It's not fair to the people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+755c76a9fbaa,66FE148BE39B,"We waste all our time to vote on a president we want, to only end up voting for the electors. I understand that it does have its good affects, but it just feels like we don't even matter. Where's the freedom? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df7271be5a35,66FE148BE39B,Some people think we should keep the Electoral College. Others don't. It has it's good things. It has it's bad. I personally feel like we should just get rid of it. What do you think we should do?   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0ef1f03a9ca5,670F2243BADC,"Over the years many people have complained that voting for a president of the united states is unfair. That they fell that someting should be done to change the voting system. In the articals given to me i have read some resons to keep it and to abolish it. In source one the electoral college is a process, not a place. the founding fathers astablished it in the constitution as a compromise between elections. For the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a588954ace46,670F2243BADC,The electoral college consists of 538 electors but if a majority is 270 electoral votes. Under the 23rd amendment of the constitution the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for pourposes of the electoral college. You are choosing an electors when you vote for president because when you vote for a canidate u a really voting for your candidate's electors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4219a46493ac,670F2243BADC,There are some little things that need to be done to fix it a little like fir example the part thats stats that smaller states have barly no power and that most presedents dont even wory about then becuse they don't make muche of a difrance. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42a4a488e49e,670F2243BADC,Each party selects a state of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarly betrayed). ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b7957400a7a,670F2243BADC,The other problen that is with this system is that the winer takes all ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8cbc273fb7f5,670F2243BADC,when the are may poeple that vote for ether for the republican or democratic if the oponunt has more votes they won all the electors and the oponunt does not get any votes from that state so its like you didin't even vote. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d563be4bb3b9,670F2243BADC,"If it was up to me to keep the electoral callege system i would say yes but they just have to make some few changes. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+0e79d278bbc8,671AEA2900EF,"In the first source its explain what a Electoral College is which is not a place it's a process the finding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a Congress vote and by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the eledtors where they vote between a President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The Electoral College has about 538 electors a majority of 270 are electoral votes is required to elect the President by which your state entitled allotment of electors equals the numer of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators. The 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of the Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word ""state"" also refers to the District of the Columbia. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c33407d21b2,671AEA2900EF,"The second source talks about the Indefensible Electoral College:Why even the best best-laid defenses of the system are wrong like in the first sentence ""What have Richard Nixion, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFl-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? The answer is Abolishing the electoral college! They're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral college--won the popular vote but lost the presidency, but over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This following year voter have expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency but yet the electoeral college still has its defenders. What give?... ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84c150e56386,671AEA2900EF,"The last source for the story talks about the defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. Electoral College is widely regared as an anachronism and a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declasring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocatesos this postion are coorect in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense ... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. Your votes for a presidential candidate your're actually voting for a slate of electors. There are a selects of parties that a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee.         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fcb66e0f5d23,671D0569C835,"Every 4 years, many people vote for a president they think will lead the United States to greatness; some, however, don't know that they are voting for the Electoral College to vote on their choise. This act of using the Electoral College is, by definition, not democratic. Didn't our founding fathers create this country promising democracy and people representation? They did, and that is why the Electoral College must crumble. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+66dcd517c368,671D0569C835,we need to change how our country votes on its leader, we need to use popular vote for the president of the United States ,Position,Effective,,
+4dbbbcea8e4e,671D0569C835,his method is more democratic ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8d1c04b1e34a,671D0569C835,the people representing the  Electoral College are flawed humans ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1e43eeb4cfe3,671D0569C835,the nature of this type of election forces some states to be ignored ,Claim,Effective,,,
+490931a7254e,671D0569C835,"Because of the function of the Electoral College, the people aren't truly represented for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+84d0d45ec4a0,671D0569C835,"According to Source 2, the voters--the ones supposedly voting for our new president--vote for a group of electors instead. Due to the power of the Electoral Colleg, electors can vote for any candidate. This process we have every 4 years is truly un-democratic. For example, during the 2000 election, Al Gore was the candidate with the most popular votes--this meant that the majority of the citizens of the U.S. wants him to be president. However, Al Gore lost since the majority of electors from the Electoral College voted him. Lastly, in the case of a time, the lection will truly be un-democratic; the House of Representatives will have to choose the new president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1fe372151900,671D0569C835,"The people may allow continued usage of the imperfect Electoral College, but there is still one major problem: the Electoral College is made up of flawed, easily manipulated humans. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1fc78b62fddb,671D0569C835,"According to Source 1, the electors are made up of people chosen by the candidate's political party. Immediately, these electors can easily decide on the candidate to vote on; it's just the matter of the amount of electors each candidate has. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+baf0946ab850,671D0569C835,"Also, the electors are human beings, and everyone knows that humans are flawed creatures. According to Source 2, electors have been replaced to be against the opposing candidate or wait until the last minute to vote. Although, according to Source 3, the electors are chosen and are given trust, others can still influence them. Candidates or even political parties can influence the electors to vote for their chosen person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+46695da59879,671D0569C835,"During the 2000 election, 17 states weren't even able to see a candidate they are voting for the title of president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e9767c5b4f13,671D0569C835,"Although it is understandable that candidates go to the ""swing"" and populous states, there is no excuse for ignoring thousands of people from the small states. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+67aeeab63de5,671D0569C835,"The president of the United States is the president for an entire country, not just a region of it. Voters from the non-swing states will still want to see the candidate to decide on who to vote for, even though they aren't voting for the actual candidate. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+796b102a1021,671D0569C835,"In conclusion, the Electoral College and its electors must be disbanded so that popular vote will be used in determining the new president of the United States. According to both Source 2 and 3, the process of voting a group of people to vote for you is un-democratic. Electors, the people making up th Electoral College, can be manipulated and coerced into voting a specific candidate. Lastly, non-swing states will be ignored; this will anger and frustrate them since not one candidate tried to persuade them. Florida State Senator, you must, in the best of your ability and then some, try to topple down the un-democratic roots of the Electoral College. The people, the ones who must truly decide on the president, will be immensely greatful towards you; in a 2000 poll, 60% of the voters even stated that they want a popular-vote type of election. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ab24d392e270,67325C66D1E0,I honestly think we should chnge the elction by popular vote fot the president of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+24607a418daa,67325C66D1E0,"The Electoral College system, the votes dont exactly vote fot the president. They vote for the slate of electors, then they vote for the president. From my point of veiw it says we all have an right to vote, but we aren't really electing them. The slate of electors are ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf0460d75064,67325C66D1E0,So whats the point of voting if we aren't really voting? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72b0166c02d3,67325C66D1E0,The Electoral College could also be called as the disater factor ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+75ba6cd2902d,67325C66D1E0,"The American people thought they were lucky that 2000 fiaso was the biggest crisis in a century. The state legislatures are responsible for the picking electors. So maybe it was there fault, all I'll tell you this, they were not very lucky ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0ab6e270b27,67569429BA4F,"Currently, the Electoral College makes the final decision of who should be elected president. Some people may think otherwise ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6ee592e03494,67569429BA4F,I believe that we should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America ,Position,Adequate,,,
+aa401abf145f,67569429BA4F,In the Electoral College they don't vote for the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e1b2eeb97b63,67569429BA4F,It's also unfair to voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa5bad347762,67569429BA4F,it's the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+394ffca6f173,67569429BA4F,"To begin with, I think that we should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America because the Electoral College doesn't even vote for the president ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0265a8e507c5,67569429BA4F,"As the article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer states.. Instead, they vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+925463bacb12,67569429BA4F,"Moving on, I think that we should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America because the Electoral College is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ac09a4242e0,67569429BA4F,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media marketse didn't get to see a single campaign ad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f42433332bc2,67569429BA4F,"Last but not least, I think that we should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States of America because the Electoral College is a disaster factor. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bfd88efc165f,67569429BA4F,"The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those el  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9f0e309a0bb,675BF8AB227B,"Just like the Google cofounder Sergey Brin, I too also visualize a future where cars just aren't much of a use to the world much anymore. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+961b645fd3c8,675BF8AB227B,"I envision cats being used with less gas and being much more functional than other public transportation systems. Driverless cars were an option that was invented because the option of ideal roads were objectified, leaving only the option for smart cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+600b692c760c,675BF8AB227B,"Smart cars perphaps are definitely seen as ""Smart Cars"" because they have apparent anneminities such as sensors that further promote the name of a ""Smart Car."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f177ac29c463,675BF8AB227B,The spinning sensor on the roof of some smart cars is an ideal invention that is an important part of what makes a smart car smart. The combination of sensors allow the smart car to mimic the skill of a driverless car. Sensors have become more advanced allowing for a significant signal of apparent danger which in some cases is btweer than what a human can do alone. Sensors add for a safer and more productive car which has the qualities of keeping drivers and other passengers safe. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b647029d2e46,675BF8AB227B,Smart Cars also have the capability of obtaining the antilock brakes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a14e65886f6,675BF8AB227B,"Sebastian Thurn believes that the technology of this generation compared to generations before us have come a long way, and that before Smart Cars, the was interesting qualities of cars we used before Smart Cars such as the absence of sensors, computers, and navigation. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ad3a277ba0f,675BF8AB227B,"The ""Traffic Jam Assistant"" was invented in 2013 which allowed the car to handle navigating at speeds higher than 25mph ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf83aa0f2754,675BF8AB227B,"This invention was a breakthrough, but also allowing for the driver to maintain control at all times. The ""Traffic Jam Assistant"" allows for the car to be capable of practically driving itself but also allows for the driver to take control in areas where humans are necessary for driving. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+338eb4496ee8,675BF8AB227B,"Cameras, drivers seats that vibrate when a vehicle is in danger, and flashing lights on windshields see all components that are possible to add to the already sustainable Smart Cars to make them more interesting, effective, and productive. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1d22fa2e66ca,675BF8AB227B,"I feel that driverless cars would be a great addition to our society benefitting drivers in numerous ways. Smart Cars have sensors, antilock brakes, a built in Traffic Jam Assistant"", and other anneminities such as cameras, vibrating drivers seats, and windshields with lights. These are all great contributions that would benefit drivers in numerous ways. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd4e781cba40,6770F94889E2,"Ever thought of a car that drives itself? Seems pretty crazy right? Its been shown in movies and televison and it seems pretty impossible. In reality, people are actually trying to make it happen, there has been proto types of cars that are mostly driveless and testing of many kinds. Whether it happens or not, theres a weighing question of is it a good idea? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4ed42a370cb7,6770F94889E2,"It is a bad idea, they should not make cars driveless ",Position,Adequate,,,
+95111bf693a9,6770F94889E2,"it cost a lot, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c79a18989bb,6770F94889E2,"may not even ever work, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cd990be88a91,6770F94889E2,"its dangerous. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+605277f7cdb4,6770F94889E2,"Money is a huge factor to this type of technology, can you imagine the cost of developing thousands and millions of cars that have such an advanced technology to be able to drive, brake, get to a destination all by itself? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f6a3cb6c5e61,6770F94889E2,"Its pretty expensive to even to make a proto type or test run these so called ""Diverless Cars"". If a car like such is created how would the world be changed? Not only would the car itself be expensive to create but theres more factors to just creating the cars, its how the cars themslef work. In the article, ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" the author tells about some proto types or car similar to the ""Driverless car"" image. The authors gives an example about cars that uses sensors or radio signals that are telling the cars what to do. That means, the roads would have to give off certain signals that contribute to the car itself, the roads and lights would also have to have signals and sensors. It would cost tons of money to do things such as rebulid roads or lights so cars like these would properly worl. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+71a896df50a7,6770F94889E2,"The car that drives themself may never actually be a thing, there is so much to it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bbbaf7aa2116,6770F94889E2,"The cars may never truly be driveless, technology cannot do everything humans do. There is always going to be times an actual driver may need to come in. Things such as, traffic or crashes or roadwork and there is no way of telling if driverless cars may be able to adapt to that. Not only is adapting a problem but is our technology advanced enough to have driverless cars? We as a society are advanced in the technology area but is it advanced enough to develop cars that are able to know where to go or what to do just like humans are? Technology things do not think like humans, they don't think at all, they have to be programed a certain way and there is always surprises or certain situations that these cars would not be able to do it properly or safely. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+435c6cdf28a7,6770F94889E2,Safety. This is quite the biggest concern with a product such as a driverless car. How can you insure that these cars are 100% safe? ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f7fb757cfa7,6770F94889E2,"The cars technology may run into a problem later on that it, itself is not advanced enough to know exactly what to do so it may cause a person danger. The whole car is made of technology and we can not rely on it, things happens, technology may not always work. There has to be certain signals or things such as a battery life, or the technology may just fail altogether. If someone was to be in a driveless car and the system in the car or the technology were to crash was stops the car from doing the same? If the technology messes up and the car doesn't know when to stop it could cause a crash. Technology can never be completely relied on, until it can, there will always be safety issues or concerns and thats enough not to make something that could be very dangerous to someones life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+81a93c6ae2f4,6770F94889E2,"Driverless cars seem like a huge thing, people are trying to create this dream. People are taking steps to make cars that are so advanced they can drive themselves, but that shouldn't be a thing because of the cost, we are not that advanced in our lifetime, and its a patenually dangerous idea.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb675b699f42,678A6C5DE012,"Dear State Senator, I propose that we change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States rather than having the Electoral College. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6cea4f0fe8f0,678A6C5DE012,I say this because the Electoral College is unfair to voters in many ways more than one. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e2ffcca6a5e6,678A6C5DE012,I'll start off by saying that Electoral College is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee0ba99e0a00,678A6C5DE012,"I strongly agree about this because under the electoral college system, voters do not vote for the president, they vote for a slate of electors, who then elect the president. This system is unfair because you don't always know who your electors are and you can't always control who the electors vote for. If you can't or don't know who they are voting for, then how can we trust them with the fate of our country? Although us people don't always make the right decisions, at least with popular vote we would all know that our votes wouldn't be put in someone elses hands. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f59439f43784,678A6C5DE012,"To continue my agruement, the Electoral College is also unfair in this way. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+06a68440b322,678A6C5DE012,"Say if there was to be a tie in electoral votes, the election would be given to the House of Representatives. Then the state delegations would vote for the president and the Senate would chose the vice president. When this would happen you would then not know who they were going to vote for and what your government's fate would be. So again if we had election by popular vote this wouldn't happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8aa5f1baa6d7,678A6C5DE012,"Lastly, the Electoral College is unfair to voters by the winner-take-all system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0309bea21f41,678A6C5DE012,"Since there is a winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. An example of this is back during the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't get to see the candidates at all. Some of the largest media markets didn't even see a single campaign ad. This is completely unfair and ridiculous to all potential voters. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f0f2db7fd7d,678A6C5DE012,"In the end, I think that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and ridiculous. With all the valid points and arguments I have made, they make a pretty good reason to abolish the electoral college.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a753abf69dcc,6794A463D2C5,"People have different opinions on the Electoral College. Some feel that it should be changed, and the president should be elected by popular vote. To explain what the Electoral College is, the Office of the Federal Register writes
+
+What is the Electoral College?.
+
+Bradford Plumer writes
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, to explain the problems with the Electoral College, and lastly, Richard A. Posner writes
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President to explain why we should keep the Electoral College ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0c427b3b098a,6794A463D2C5,It has been made clear that we should not change the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6d9fbd22c5ef,6794A463D2C5,"It is true that the Electoral College may be confusing (Plumer), but it has worked for all these years, thus we should just leave it the way it is. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e4e1bd791f0,6794A463D2C5,"To start, The Electoral College was established by the founding fathers as a compromise between election of the president by vote in congress, and it also considers the popular vote of qualified citizens (Office of the Federal Register). The founding fathers wanted us to use this system. They knew it would succeed. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e360fab137f3,6794A463D2C5,"Next, Plumer writes, ""It's official: The electoral college is unfair... ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a5c31de8bb2d,6794A463D2C5,"This is not true because the number of electorals each state gets is always decided by the number of members that state has in the House of Representatives, plus two for the senators (Office of the Federal Register) ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d2b10b481631,6794A463D2C5,"Additionally, Richard A. Posner says that ""There are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigree; all are pratical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. He then goes on and says, ""A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible...but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote."" In the Electoral College system, their will always be a certainty of outcome. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+35d663f5bac0,6794A463D2C5,"Plumer goes against that and writes, ""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote."" This cannot happen. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+48107942b434,6794A463D2C5,"Posner also writes that ""The electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d41328eb76e,6794A463D2C5,"The north, for example, does not have enough electoral votes to elect a president (Posner). The president is everyone's president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e956b33ba790,6794A463D2C5,"Also, The Electoral College considers swing states and big states ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b3ffef7cfb90,6794A463D2C5,"Plumer writes ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d5e86d27559a,6794A463D2C5,"This is not true because of the idea of swing states and big states.  Swing States, also known as toss-up states, are the states that pretty much decide the election. They could go either way (Posner). ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a3b43c906b98,6794A463D2C5,"""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senete decreed in the Constitution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8d28db8493c,6794A463D2C5,"This means that the larger the state (in population, not size), the more their overall vote weighs ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5874ebec30cb,6794A463D2C5,"Lastly, by using the Electoral College, we are avoiding Run-Off Elections ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+91f959cfd004,6794A463D2C5,A run off election is when no candidate recieves a majority (Posner). ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87f2effbae81,6794A463D2C5,"In conclusion, you and I both know the Electoral College has some flaws, but overall, it makes sense to keep it the way it is. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c55721d61a6b,6796C7366713,I think you should allow students to bring their phones to school and use them during study halls and lunch periods ,Position,Adequate,,,
+655e0a988135,6796C7366713,"Students really might need their phones, and if they couldn't bring their phones to school and use them at all, then they all would need to use the school phone ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3b8ce23b6c4,6796C7366713,"If everyone wanted to use the school phone, then they would have to take turns in using it for only a certain amount of minutes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a91d66fe9c63,6796C7366713,"If a kid does get caught using a cell phone in class, then teachers can take their phones away.. just theirs' ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e37cbd83ad54,6796C7366713,"If we don't have our phones at school, then just think about all of the downs, and complaining their would be! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd78db33cc59,6796C7366713,I don't think you want that though ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1a5dbf351051,6796C7366713,"Let us be able to take our phones and use them! We won't want to get our freedom from them, so we won't text in class. If some people get caught, then they should get their's. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d0e0c7d09398,67B143000AE2,"Mars has been a planet that we have been exploring for many years. We have discovered many abnormal objects on the planet. In 1976, we took a picture of the region Cydonia, and we found something that seemed to look like a human face. Our eyes are adapted to recognizing faces and that is why we recognized the face on Mars more easily. Higher quality images that were taken in 2001 show that the face on Mars is no sign of ancient civilization on Mars but in fact a mesa. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+eb5418cc239b,67B143000AE2,"It is a natural landform just like it would be on our home planet of Earth. Although some conspiracy theorists say differently, and think that is some sort of ancient civilization building these objects. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+06eaf4ca16eb,67B143000AE2,"First off, the cameras that we have today are more advanced than the ones we had. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ccd45bb22b53,67B143000AE2,"The first picture that was taken of the face on Mars was taken in 1976 and the quality back then was not as good as it is now. The picture that was taken in 2001 was a higher quality picture and scientists figured out that is was just a mesa and not a sign of any ancient civilization on Mars. For example the camera used in 1976, spanned 43 meters compared to the camera NASA used in 2001 spanned 1.56 meters. In the picture of 1976, the shadows that were present that day formed an illusion that made it seem like there was a face. In paragraph two of the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" it says that, ""Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2299332357000,67B143000AE2,"Another thing is that, Jim Garvin, a cheif scientist from NASA's Mars Exploration Program, compared the Martian mesa to natural landforms that occur here on Earth. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+230b88822d30,67B143000AE2,"In paragraph 12, Garvin said, "" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about thye sane height as the Face on Mars."" Jim Garvin is saying that these formations on Mars are very similar to the ones that we have here on Earth. He is also saying that there os no face on Mars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+facd913e3d33,67B143000AE2,"In contrast, conspiracy theorists say that there is a face on Mars and that there is ancient civilization on Mars. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+86cf861979af,67B143000AE2,"In paragraph 8, it says that, "" The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings we hidden by haze."" Conspiracy theorists also state that NASA would rather hide the evidence that there is an ancient civilization on Mars, as it says in paragraph 5. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df2c48d0f634,67B143000AE2,"Also stated in paragraph 5, is that the defenders of NASA wish that there was an ancient civilization on Mars. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d4d671cb933e,67B143000AE2,"The face has been a pop icon ever since the discovery of the formation. the face will always be a piece of history and will always been known to man. If there was an actual face on Mars then that would be a sign of life. The face ended up eing a mesa and nothing else besides that. Although it would have been an exciting discovery for NASA, we still have much more of space that is unknown and unexplored. NASA is bound to find some kind of incredible object. We will have to wait until that day comes and find something incredible and will be part of the incredible true story of space.             ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+75418461b6fc,67BD359D8BD2,"The United States has always had people complaining about the Electoral College, and that's exactly what I'm about to do.  I think that the Electoral College was probably a good idea at first, but it's not very helpful for the elections.  The Electoral College, as you know, has people from every state, some states having more on it than others based on the population. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f71ae79c4c58,67BD359D8BD2,It's not right to have a few people have just as big of a say as hundreds of thousands of people. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f5307c991c75,67BD359D8BD2,"I read from ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" and learned that in 2000, Al Gore won the popular vote from the people, but then lost the election because the Electoral College voted against him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02b5b8841427,67BD359D8BD2,"That means that the president was not picked based on who the people of this country wanted, but who only a small amount of people wanted.  How does that make any sense at all? There's no way to defend that.  ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c960fab3451c,67BD359D8BD2,"If it's OUR country, WE should be the ones voting for who we want to lead us, not a couple of people who think they're more important than the rest of the population that votes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8186e21f5c1f,67BD359D8BD2,"What happens if there's a tie in the Electoral College?  We're going to take it to the House of Representatives?  That means ONE person will be representing their whole entire state's vote.  How safe is that?  I'm sure if it comes down to it and we have to do that, there's going to be a lot of people who aren't happy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad7f6400fa05,67BD359D8BD2,It doesn't even make sense to have one person have as much say as their whole state put together. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0dc8e7b9e742,67BD359D8BD2,"There are some good things about the Electoral College, though. I admit the Electoral College would be good when the people's votes are close or maybe even tie, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6c5fe5adecce,67BD359D8BD2,but how often is that going to happen? ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+ea4af5aa5ed4,67BD359D8BD2,"I think it's also smart that when you vote for who you want to be president, you also vote for their electors.  ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0375f2c4dd9f,67BD359D8BD2,That's much better than having to vote for a president and the electors separately. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6ee9e90450a,67BD359D8BD2,It'd be much easier though if we got rid of electors all together ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+664ff98512dc,67BD359D8BD2,"It's kind of like when you're at a crossroads.  You and someone else get there at the same time.  They're to your right, so they have the right of way and can go first.  It doesn't matter that you got there at the same exact time, or even if you're going somewhere more important than where they're going.  It's like that with the election.  The Electoral College and the state may both be voting, but the Electoral College has the ""right of way"" and has more importance over us, whether they care who they're voting for or not. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc12d2ed7b3a,67BD359D8BD2,"The Electoral College was made a long time ago by people that some will argue were a lot smarter than us, but as times change, so should rules.  I don't think it was a dumb idea, it seems smart as a whole, but I just don't think when you actually put it in use it's fair.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b228faa1a334,67BD359D8BD2,"When you cast your vote, you want it to mean something, but if someone else exactly like you happens to be one of the electors for the College and votes for someone else, their vote is a lot more important. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a8619c57553,67BD359D8BD2,"There's a lot to be said about the Electoral College... Both good and bad, but in the end there isn't much anyone who is normal and whose vote barely counts for anything can do.  We can say how bad it is however much we want.  We can throw at you facts upon facts about how unnecessary or unfair the Electoral College is.  In the end, it's up to the government to decide what will happen, as it always has been. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85f240697217,67BD359D8BD2,"To sum it all up, the Electoral College isn't a smart way to help decide who should be president. This is the United States of America, it's for the people and made by the people, so why on Earth should they not be able to be the only ones to pick who will run them as a country? 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a7973300e0fe,67C12A362ABA,"The Electoral College is only taking your personal vote for a leader for our economy and putting into into another persons perspective. That's unfair. When you make a vote about the leader of your country, you want to be independent. You want to feel like you are doing something great to help your country. Everyone does ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f0863e6d957a,67C12A362ABA,"The electoral college needs to be abolished for the sake of our citizens. We would all benefit from changing the voting system to Popular Vote, on voting for the president of the United States ",Position,Effective,,,
+2ab697dc96e3,67C12A362ABA,"Think about it, what good is the Electoral College system doing for our society. Its surely letting the state electors get their opinion. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ba145de652e,67C12A362ABA,"In source #2,
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, by Bradford Plumer , says, "" Prehaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. "" Who wants that? What's it even worth voting then if your vote, your vote on the leader of America gets put into the hands of the House Of Representatives to decide on. Think about it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+83d1b8d95ea7,67C12A362ABA,"I can see why people would want to keep it. In source #3,
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , by Ricard A. Posner, says ""The Electoral College is a widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring a canidate who receives the most popular votes the winner."" It does offer support that maybe our country needs. Maybe we do need help in choosing who our president should be. The Electoral College gives us us a more official point of view on which president should be elected. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+418c198103b5,67C12A362ABA,Some people have a hard time realizing what the Electoral College is even doing for our society. Me included. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64b2d59b0b65,67C12A362ABA,"In Source #2,
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, by Bradford Plumer, says
+
+""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best."" I think its best to say the Electoral college IS outdated, it IS unfair and irrational. Its simply taking away from your one voice of a citizen of the United States of America  and vanishing it into thin air. Stick up for yourself and abolish the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30bbe54a22b8,67C12A362ABA,"In souce #1,
+
+Does the Electoral College Work?
+
+, by the Office of the Federal Register, says "" The Electoral College process consists of the selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10fc9817f234,67C12A362ABA,"Don't let the electoral votes get in the way of your own. Vote for independence, Vote for your voice, your vote being heard, vote to abolish the Electoral College ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fe4021a0e6f0,67D14DACC392,"Students attend school everyday with hundreds of other students around them. The amount of small interactions one student could have with another are countless. Large public gatherings are a recipe for the spread of diseases. There has recently been a rise of concern about the infamous Coronavirus. A solution to prevent the spread of the virus includes, but is not limited to, students attending online school to lower the chances of it spreading quickly. This solution is a well advised decision ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e780467169d6,67D14DACC392,Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home for many reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7ae1de4942e7,67D14DACC392,"Firstly, they won't fall behind in classes when they are too ill to be in a public space. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+445144555d8b,67D14DACC392,"Secondly, they can still receive their education when they don't have proper transportation ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9a0930554ea1,67D14DACC392,"Lastly, they can still interact with classmates and teachers in an unconventional setting. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6cce6cbae090,67D14DACC392,"Cold and flu season comes every year, leaving those who are unfortunate enough to have caught it, unable to attend school for at least a week, or however long a doctor recommends they should stay home. When these students come back to school, they are bombarded with make-up work that needs to be completed as soon as possible. Classes don't stop for students when they take a leave of absence. If students were able to attend online school, they wouldn't have to catch up on work because they would still be able to do it at home with the proper instructions and could still ask for help when needed. Teachers can get sick as well, sudden symptoms can make teachers leave abruptly without assigning work for students or leaving notes for substitutes. This sets students behind and could be prevented if students could attend online classes ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+29e5016e8903,67D14DACC392,Making online school a plausible option would also promote better attendance because students wouldn't have to physically be at school to be marked present. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4a083c00cac1,67D14DACC392,"While having the best intentions, public transit is often unreliable and falls short when needed. School buses can be later than they claim to be, resulting in students waiting outside in harsh weather, buses can come earlier than planned, leaving students deserted, there are times where substitute bus drivers, that aren't familiar with the streets, stray from the route, and even instances where students have to walk long distances to simply reach a bus stop ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc0901d93da6,67D14DACC392,All of these inconveniences could be easily avoided if students could complete their work from home. Colleges offer online classes for students that are unable to be on campus or students that need flexible schedules. Schools could resemble the same structure college classes have to better adjust to the students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b38f703ebf8d,67D14DACC392,There are some people who believe that attending school in a conventional setting is essential to students so that they can interact with others and understand topics with face to face lessons ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+268525c87d8a,67D14DACC392,but these things can still be achieved in an online setting. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+41be4533e2fe,67D14DACC392,"As technology continues to advance, students need to be aware of how to work these tools to be prepared for the work force ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03ad8d42b6e5,67D14DACC392,Giving students the ability to complete their school work from home is a perfect teaching opportunity and a useful skill to familiarize students with. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cd1aa89b3ea7,67D14DACC392,"With the rise of concern and media coverage for diseases and viruses such as the Coronavirus, schools around the world are considering online schooling for students. This would be a precaution to prevent diseases and viruses from spreading in a large crowd. Students would in fact benefit from being able to attend online classes from home for many reasons. Firstly, they would still receive their education, even when they are at risk for spreading an illness they may have acquired. Secondly, they can still learn when they don't have access to transportation. Lastly, they still attain the people skills learned in the school environment. Schools are becoming more technology based every year, this just might be the next step. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c3748369706c,681279579E8A,"Well we can't be forced to do community service if we don't have to, volunteering is just fine. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+51a7dc27fa0f,681279579E8A,"Because however we do want to do some things either than cleaning, just because it's recommended, doesn't mean we have to. If other people choose to do it by their own will, that's their choice, obviously. But other people do think differently and will go against it, which is what I'm trying to write to you of course. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf2bd9984684,681279579E8A,"For example, if you ""require"" us to do community service even though we don't want to. It's like slavery for us kids. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0574a8f14d13,681279579E8A,"Though you think it's good for us, there's other people who would love to join the people who's volunteering for community service. Okay numerous of us are doing it, either it's punishments or volunteers or it's just your job period. It's good to do community service but really you can't force us unless you want slavery in the United States again. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+131de99a3935,681279579E8A,"Though I'm going against it, I'll still write you a pro about letting students take action on community service. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+90b4fa680626,681279579E8A,"First of all, we're just sitting down mostly our days watching TV and computer games. This would actually help us get to know more people, and be more social. Also, depending on what we're volunteering for, also a good work-out. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dcfaad7972da,681279579E8A,"For what reason this is going to effect everyone, making all your students do this requirement might get alto of parents to come to your school, just to punish their kids for doing certain things and bringing them into awkward situations. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4e06138ae6cb,681279579E8A,"In conclusion, my point is not to require students for community service. Because it's just of course like forcing us again. For what I heard , slavery wasn't allowed in United States. We should get the right to do as we may, according to the law. Not everything , but in this case, we have the right to say no for educated students to perform community service by will. Some good may take in this course, but not all good. Though you think it'll be good for us students, learn some things. But for us, it's unfair and cruel. Somehow if you're volunteering as I wrote. It's okay because that's by their choice. So as I write this again, I say no to requiring students of our age and skill to do community service.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+662cf66f653d,6874FC63CF20,"Driverless cars may seem like a thing of the future, but they are much closer than most people seem to believe. Many different companies such as Google, Tesla, Audi, and many more have already built and tested their own models. However, many people are wondering whether self-driving cars are a help or a danger to society. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1639a7aafa5a,6874FC63CF20,"Driverless cars are the next step in automotive technology and the research on them should continue because they will be safer and more efficient than cars driven by human drivers. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+b9f6306b248e,6874FC63CF20,"Every human makes a mistake at some point in his or her life. Whether they are distracted by something they see or they fall asleep at the wheel, people will make errors; it is part of our nature. On the other hand, computers function on data and do not make nearly the amount of mistakes as people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0dd439cd87a3,6874FC63CF20,"That is why self-driving cars will make roads safer and lead to less damage. Driverless cars take data they recieve from sensors, cameras, and GPS and they use this information to pick the smartest way to keep occupants safe on the road. Also the automated systems like driver assitance and antilock brakes that are already inside cars have proven that these programs will make driving safer. For example, antilock brakes function by detecting and then reacting to skids by apply brakes and reducing engine power. Therefore the driver is better able to avoid hazards and maintain control in dangerous situations. Google has also already tested some of their semi-driverless cars and these vehicles have not crashed in half a million miles. As proven by already installed automated features, technology will continue to make drivers and passangers safer. The next step in this technology is a self-driving car that will limit the amount of error that can be cost lives. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+61a8b48e39cc,6874FC63CF20,"
+Another reason driverless cars should continue to be manufactered is that they will be more efficient and better protect the enviroment ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+428cee2323f5,6874FC63CF20,"Global warming is a problem that needs to be dealt with and one of the major culprits of it is the exhaust from diesel burning cars. The cars that Google is manufacturing are attempting to use half the fuel of a regular car while providing a safer function. With computers that can regulate exhaust, it is not too hard to imagine in the near future, if given more research, that a self-driving car could accomplish such a feat. Driverless cars would also be more efficient in that they would cut down on transportation time between destinations. Using GPS features, an autonomous car could calculate the quickest route to a destination and it would never miss a turn. Self-driving cars would not only be more fuel-efficient and help save the environment, but they also would be more time efficient. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+89569289f8e7,6874FC63CF20,"Safety and efficiency are a few of the reasons why autonomous cars should continue to be reseached and developed. Many automoble manufacters are already producing mostly independent driving cars and soon they will become common place. By 2020 most major car producers plan to have a autonomous car model. That is not to say that everyone needs to have a self-driving, but those who do purchase one of these vehicles will not only help themselves, but they will also help others and the world around them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+12a16ecd9ec5,688BD7FE6932,Not many notice how electoral college is important even it has some flaws. This voting system is a great way to determine the final results to see who becomes the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8f9ed9562bc0,688BD7FE6932,Besides having an electoral college we have a popular vote and it always turns out to be the president with less votes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fbb7fd178966,688BD7FE6932,"as it states in the passage ""it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote."" The electoral college consists of 538 electors, and from that 538 votes 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9661374dd530,688BD7FE6932,but appearentley people belive that electoral college is unfair. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+145d05c30165,688BD7FE6932,"In the passage it states ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system in each state,"" many can tell from reading this that many people are hating the electoral college idea. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+348e0e6e72d0,688BD7FE6932,Electoral college may be unfair but it does chooes the president even if they add a popular vote which would out rule the electoral college. In this case if we were to of had popular vote instead of electoral college than it would be even more difficult than electoral college. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+abc93e54ff7d,688BD7FE6932,When ever using popular vote to determine the president than the process for it isnt long, this system is unfair too because of the people choosing the president because of the words and lies it says ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,
+278fc5c9e446,688BD7FE6932,What we need is to have electoral college to determine if the candidate is fit to be the president by not saying lies but from saying things that will actually improve the lives of others. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a0d88cbac6f,688BD7FE6932,"Why cant people just vote normally, why is there even an electoral college, why do they make us vote even if there's gonna be an electoral collegeor popular vote which is gonna decide for us. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+925d8e276eb9,688BD7FE6932,"So many questions that have to be asked and answered; theres not many people that understand what the electoral college is for, but people also understand is how unfair it is to the people that vote.""The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse."" So appearentley there was a crisis including the electoral college, but we still kept this system even if the crisis barely happened in 2000.   ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8837ea2fad33,689AA040C1A2,"Voting for whos the next president can be hard. Theres so many things to consider, like who will support you the best and make the right desition. The government has made two types of ways to vote, Electoral College and popular vote ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d98878f7f827,689AA040C1A2,I believe that we should go with the popular vote method ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b53e1771093c,689AA040C1A2,When voting like this its not a confusing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a5da23687dd,689AA040C1A2,Theres no missing ad campaigns ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2b2b28fdee74,689AA040C1A2,in the winner take all you dont rule out another persons elector for his chose ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+baa7deddf499,689AA040C1A2,Using popular vote for electing our president is better then Electoral College i believe because its not that confusing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9993e1f2614,689AA040C1A2,In Electoral College you vote for a wet number of electors and they give their own vote on their behalf. Now with popular vote say one state votes for president b rather then president a then the state votes for president b ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4c9385c5517e,689AA040C1A2,In ppular vote both presidents are trying to win you over so they will make a campaign. what if you never see the campaign? This is what can happen in the Electoral College method ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56ee1af323d6,689AA040C1A2,"If a president knows that a certain state will not vote for them then the president wont perade around there. Therefore the state cant make a correct decision. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fc212c04d81,689AA040C1A2,One reason I prefer the popular vote method over the Electoral College is do to the winner take all ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5691d21a8101,689AA040C1A2,in ruling out the electors that didnt vote for the president. So if theopposing pesident winns the election then he can single you out for note voting for him and i dont believe thats fair. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+70635dbf6711,689AA040C1A2,"So when it comes to election day which method will you chose? Electoral College or popular vote you know that im going to stick with popular vote because Electoral College can be confusing, the ad campaigns  cna be unfair and ruling out the opposing electors.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d0ebf84ca6df,690409AA7E69,State Senator I disagree on keeping the Electoral College! For only the electors choose who is going to be the new President ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5cd89992f6c7,690409AA7E69,I say we get dispose of it and change the election to most popular vote! That way we also have a say on who is going to be the new President and the new Vice President. For we also have to have a say on this. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a6ba2cbbe3e6,690409AA7E69,"The thing that is wrong with this system is that the voters do not vote for the President, but for the slate of the electors who in turn elect the President! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bcc7e4edb20,690409AA7E69,"like it says on source 2 paragraph 10 ""If you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for [John] kerry 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d08619cf0af5,690409AA7E69,"The Electoral College does not let us, the people, choose who is going to be the new President it only allows the electors choose who it's going to be by their vote ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f59fe062ea2,690409AA7E69,"For an example on the 2000 U.S. Presidental race, Al Gore recieved more of the individual votes than George W. Bush, but Bush only the won election because he recieved 271 electoral votes than Al Gore's 266! It wasn't fair that    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18db319c7908,690D4166C20C,I understand that you wish to change our school policy regarding requirements for sports. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8ef6a5c7b280,690D4166C20C,Now I know that we have many wonderful students who are tremendous at their sport and they made a commitment to have a C average or above ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4f512e47879,690D4166C20C,"Raising the requirements to a B average would make them try harder, but some would give up because they think its too hard ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0caf64a312ed,690D4166C20C,"Having smart students who participate in sports would be quite interesting but what about our star Football players, Basketball players, or Cheerleaders who have a C average and have to give up something they love. Now I know I wouldn't want to give up my sport because of my grades, and i know you love watching our teams win. And if every athlete who have a C average quit their sport then we would have very few athletes in our school and a less likely chance of winning our games and that wouldn't be first-rate now would it? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6759e37bc496,690D4166C20C,"Our students have fair grades but I do admit they could be better, I believe we should recommend B averages instead of enforcing a ""law"" about them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f414dc7451ee,690D4166C20C,"I think that we should leave it the way it is now and keep our sports teams, academic teams, and school clubs the way they're supposed to be with every member remaining on that specific group, club, team, or whatever you wish to call it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c10aee6be5ed,6910A7FECEEA,"I highly urge you to take some things into consideration before making your final decision on the policy change. Many students participating in sports have a C grade average. If you change the policy so that students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have a B grade average, many students will not have anything they participate in besides school. How healthy could that be? It isn't. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ac31b41e54db,6910A7FECEEA,"I believe you should make a policy that allows anyone with a C grade average or higher allowed to participate in sports and other activities. If they have a D or F grade average, then I agree that they should spend more of their time working on school work so they don't fail, but why make the students be above average just to participate in something besides school? I have three important reasons for pressing the matter. ",Position,Effective,,,
+2b0f99675e25,6910A7FECEEA,"if the students are not near the risk of failing, they should have the chance to participate in sports and other activities. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb075ee0d4c6,6910A7FECEEA,"sometimes being in a sport helps students to have better concentration and energy, which will cause them to be better in school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1551d2502ce0,6910A7FECEEA,if students have something to participate in they will be more willing to try harder in school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1abca149d41b,6910A7FECEEA,"This may cause students stress and anxiety. If you lower the policy to a C grade average, then the children just might do better in school overall. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+477f9dedcf33,6910A7FECEEA,"It is proven that if a student has more participation in other activities, that they do twice as good as those that aren't in other activities. Why cause them to have to have a good grade to do sports, when they could get better grades by doing sports? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5027bebc3e5b,6910A7FECEEA,Motivation is always a major helper in school work. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03f6aefb6b17,6910A7FECEEA,"Now that you understand my reasons for wanting to avoid the change in policy, please think a little harder about it. If C's are average, why change that? Being a sport or other activity, may sometimes give the students more concentration and energy therefore, help them to do better in school. If students have something to participate in, wouldn't they want to try harder? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4f23f2832507,691DF95F51C3,I do not think there are alien's in Mars or any other planet . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3980d98edfe2,691DF95F51C3,I think there are no aliens because astronauts have to have tanks filled with specialized air thats on Earth ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+01e9e4b182aa,691DF95F51C3,"Animals like , mammals , and reptiles can do things human beings cannot and will never be able to do . Reptiles may be able to poision its prey but Humans can't . Mammals can eat a human alive Humans cant do that ! Each group can do something the other one can't . One thing they all have in common is that they breathe air ! If aliens existed they wound not be able to survive unless they had a ' suit ' on the 24/7 . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e58969fc487,691DF95F51C3,There is no sign of human life on any other planet but earth and austronauts have put special cameras just in case there is signs of life and they won't miss it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b353e55b788,691DF95F51C3,"There have been multiple times people have claimed they've seen Big Foot they have "" videos "" , evidence and samples of the hair but scientist have not caught big foot so people can claim there are aliens all day long ; but until the world is able to see one in real life and scientist and everyone can see it ; it doesnt exist . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8f178699f03,691DF95F51C3,If an alien left an imprint on the rock that means it was walking and the face got stuck and it had to pull it off . There would be finger prints on the rock and foot prints in Mars ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0ec55cef7f14,691DF95F51C3,"The text states "" formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes , nose , and mouth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef4a720431e1,691DF95F51C3,If these people have never seen an actual martian how can they say it has the structure of an alien but do not exactly know what it looks like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+104f0a5d009d,691DF95F51C3,"Accusation and predictions of what an alien looks like is man made no one has ever seen an alien on earth or in space . People are predicting what an alien looks like . The creature could look like a dog , cat or even a human being . Scientific research is not always accurate because they can make something new right now and 5 years later come out with a new and IMPROVED item . Every year scientist think they know what an alien look like but every following year it changes and becomes slightly different . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adbec2c315a0,691DF95F51C3,An alien is basically a Superhero every kids wants to think they're real but in reality as you get old you learn its just a made up myth that people tend to believe . When research shows the alien has been found and captured people can say I told you so but until then I will continue to give out reasons on why I believe they're not real ! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b473f6d2f782,693D502DB723,"Have you ever, when you were a teen, owed lunch money, and you need to call a parent to drop you off money? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ca535ceecf1d,693D502DB723,"This example leads me to believe that policy one is the better choice because teens, and children should be allowed to have their cell phones out at free times such as study hall, lunch and after school hours. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2d7b4f90d418,693D502DB723,"What if, the school policy was that you couldn't have cell phones out at all! How would you be able to eat lunch if you owed money and you couldn't eat because of it? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+614654e32eb6,693D502DB723,Also what if you had an emergency and you needed to call your parent immediately and you were not allowed to have a cell phone out at all (policy two ) ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ba66bb6dc74,693D502DB723,I believe that students should be allowed to have their cell phones with them as long as they are off in their bag or pocket. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8c8f7bdb72e9,693D502DB723,"But, this does NOT mean that they should have it out texting, only if an emergency approaches and it is strictly needed. This is why policy one is the superior choice for the school. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+75d28473a7ba,694238280A93,I think the Electoral college is a good way to vote for the president or vice president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a7e89ff87dc,694238280A93,"i think without the Electoral college, we wouldn't have anyone to vote for the president or vice president. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+12f80213bf98,694238280A93,We have each candidate running for president in our state and it has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by the candidate political party. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adb501baf2a4,694238280A93,"most state have a winner take all system because it awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. The 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e40215d48f4c,694238280A93,"The word state refers to the District of Columbia. The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. We help choose our state's electors when we vote for president because when we vote for our candidate we are actually voting for our candidate electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b37e4146e3d9,694238280A93,"I think the best laid defenses of the system are wrong because some voters might sometime vote for the wrong candidate and they might sometime get confused about the electors. After Al Gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college, he won the popular vote but lost the presidency. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. The disaster factor is the single best argument against the electoral college. I agree that most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in each state. Candidate don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the swing states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidate at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina,and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't see a single campaign ad. I agree that the it's official that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best agruments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. The agruments against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right. Abolish the electoral college. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d4e848d876db,694238280A93,"I think the five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President was for its lack of democratic. The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. I disagree the advocates of this postition are correct in arguing that the Electoral college method is ot democratic in a modern sense. It is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When we vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors because we're not actually voting for the president, we're just voting for the slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed. However it it entirely possibe that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections inn which no candidate receives a majority of the vote cast. I agree that they made the five reasons for retaining the Electoral College.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+edc8c84c720b,697647371E0B,"The majority of students in middle and high schools are glued to their cell phones everywhere they go. Even though they are used to text friends frequently, they are also important to scheduling. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+09a259041138,697647371E0B,I think the policy best suited for our school would be the first policy. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8065cf9146a9,697647371E0B,"Cell phones are often necessary to determine whether or not a student can get home after school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+79c814c1dcf6,697647371E0B,"to schedule after school activities, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a991d182eb3,697647371E0B,and to make plans with other students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de459d71f06d,697647371E0B,To take away all of their right to use a cell phone during school hours would limit them to not being able to do this while eating lunch or having a free period. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+78414fd51f7f,697647371E0B,"If a student is unsure if their parents can pick them up from school or not when they aren't taking the bus, it is necessary to contact either their mom or dad to see if they can get home quickly after school ends. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7aec97e3e956,697647371E0B,"Sometimes, when a student isn't able to call a parent, they end up waiting for an hour or more outside the school until he/she is picked up from school. Students need to be able to use cell phones for situations like these, especially when they much homework to complete for school because then they have less time to do their required work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9aff7ffa803f,697647371E0B,Another reason why students should be allowed to use their cell phones during lunch and free times is because many are involved with some sort of after school activity. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a1292303a3dc,697647371E0B,"Whether it's a sport, musical instrument, or anything else, events within that activity are often scheduled last minute or without the student knowing days ahead of time. When this happens, they may not have transportation to the location if it is not held at the same school. In this scenario, students should be able to contact a parent or friend who can drive them to wherever they need to be. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b2d1a5d8f040,697647371E0B,The last reason why I think you should choose Policy 1 is because students need to take a break from working constantly and make plans with friends ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7346867eaf9a,697647371E0B,"Students have so much homework to do when they come home from school, and sometimes it can become overwhelming. Students need to be able to spend time with friends after school and not be always thinking of all the work that needs to get done by the next day. Taking a short break is helpful and make them feel less stressed about their schoolwork. So, students should also be able to use their cell phones to call or text friends to schedule activities together. They can even study for an upcoming test or quiz together, so they can get a higher grade. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1655db7c5f76,697647371E0B,"Overall, Policy 1 is a better policy because it still allows students to sometimes contact others with their cell phones. Today, cell phones are used by the majority of Americans multiple times. To take away their cell phones wouldn't be right. In some situations, students need them to call or text others to help them for whatever. Policy 1 works best because they have the chance to contact parents or friends when they need to, but they won't get distracted during class when they are turned off. This policy allows them to take care of anything they may need to, yet still be able to focus in class. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7a23047af9ff,699EBFBA9770,I take your position in thinking to require every student to perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0,699EBFBA9770,I think that if you require students to volunteer for community service I know that some of them will be really mad because they think its a waste of time ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9b59420cf7ee,699EBFBA9770,but someday day they will look back at the day they did community service and thank their principal for requiring them to do that. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c1d058938331,699EBFBA9770,Many students of the school may have done community service. Community service may change the way a student thinks. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95dd3151ff9a,699EBFBA9770,"Lets say that their is someone in the school that never likes doing homework, you may ask that person to do some community service like taking care of something. The person at first may think like why do I have to take care of something just because I don't do my homework. If you tell them they have to volunteer in a dog shelter they wont want to do it but if you also tell them they are in charge of everything and that if anything goes wrong it would be their fault. The student will probably get scared and do everything it takes to do everything good. After community service is over he will probably be a better student by doing his homework. If the student probably did change he would probably ask to see if he could do other community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4c26b69d95f1,699EBFBA9770,"If a student also doesn't do their homework you may ask that person to be a teacher in another school full of kids that don't do their homework, so the kid would fell the same way the teachers fell when some of their students don't do their homework. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+13747d9b63c6,699EBFBA9770,"The student will feel very bad for their teacher, and when they come back to school they will always do their homework and say sorry to their teacher for never doing their homework. After that happens the student will go back to the school where the students don't do their homework and ask them to please do their homework. He will also tell them that he never used to do his homework but he came to this school is search of trying to change his mind about doing homework. He could also tell them that he believes in them and that everybody could do their homework and that all they had to do is try. With that little that person has done he could change a whole school and the way students fell in school. If you do your homework you could go to a good college and study something you like and becoming a very successful person in life. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e8fce1133949,69ADC83F4BBE,"Me being a young teenager and only being in highschool, I feel as if we should keep the Electoral College. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+0b32cbc916f5,69ADC83F4BBE,citizens are going too choose the president they like ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1363c4e01402,69ADC83F4BBE,the president that they think will change things ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d14f56be7e86,69ADC83F4BBE,the president that they think looks best. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b006e94897ba,69ADC83F4BBE,"Changing too the most popular vote will not be the best idea because, citizens are going too choose the president that they like regardless if the president is good or not so good. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+eae014ab0f06,69ADC83F4BBE,"If us citizens that are voting like the president, then chances are, we're going too vote for him or her. Not only are we going too vote for him or her, were also going to tell our friends too vote for them also so the president can get the most likes and get elected. With the Electoral College, the votes have to go through a process and then the election goes from there. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a1035c9d4b4,69ADC83F4BBE,"Chances being with the most popular election is, we're going too get a not soo good president elected as our president. Most people think that if they choose the ""right"" president, then things are going too change when thats not true ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5b0388c11c0e,69ADC83F4BBE,". People think that once a new president gets elected that, things around the world are going too change. Yet, when things dont change, they all say ""well, I only her/him for them because he/she looked as if he/she could change things."" Just because he/she LOOKS like they could change something, doesn't mean its going too happen. That's where the saying ""don't judge a book by its cover"" comes in. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+801e35955bc8,69ADC83F4BBE,"I've heard many people say ""I voted for such and such as president because he/she looks best."" In an election for president, looks do not matter what so ever. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1221bc53cb4e,69ADC83F4BBE,"The president could be handsome or gorgeous and be the worst president in the United States and/or the president could be ugly and be the best president. In a president election, no one is going too care about the looks of the president. We're going too care about the person being voted for president, outlook on things as being the president. A lot comes with being a president and the looks surely aren't one of the things. In my personal opinion, if you're voting for the looks, then maybe you shouldnt be voting at all. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e6587af4609b,69ADC83F4BBE,"
+There's many reasons on why we shouldnt change too the most popular vote election and why we should just stay with the Electoral College. The most popular vote election would not be the smartest idea of voting for president and honestly, in my opinion, I feel as if the Electoral College is best. Who would want a president being president because they got the most votes for being liked, voted because their the right president, or voted because they look the best? Truth be told, that's probably the worst thing too change too. With that being said, lets stick too the Electoral College.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+508cdd4a4b94,69CF251771E1,Through out the world a lot of people are excited about the driverless cars that are being developed. However some of them fail to realize the negativities that come with this package. ,Position,Effective,,,
+d94a80f3f130,69CF251771E1,"Not having to drive 24/7 would be nice, but at what price? Vehicles are not exactly the most reliable resource. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a103d7d9d83,69CF251771E1,"While your car is in driverless mode what are you doing? You could be texting, eating, writing something down, or for heavens sake you could be sleeping! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+690417f0cb82,69CF251771E1,"Drivers will become extremely wreckless, more so than they are now. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a4c4699cc8ee,69CF251771E1,When in a vehicle the driver makes commands whether to turn or to signal a turn signal. Now give the vehicle control and you are giving it control of your life and whatever passengers you have with you. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+990d07f80d15,69CF251771E1,"The car is not perfected. It will most likely make countless mistakes. Technology failure being a main one. While you are texting or turned around the engine could die out or the brakes could go haywire. Your instincts will tell you to take the wheel and try to get it under control, what if the commands are inconclussive and won't respond. Who is to blame, the vehicle for shorting out or the driver for becoming too un-alert. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+341da12371c4,69CF251771E1,"Everyone has their own opinions, everyone has their own brain that allowes them to make the wrong or the right decission based on what they believe. Will you allow yourself to fall victim to awe or amazement and wonder at these new inventions. Or will you go over teh pro's and cons of becoming too reliant on the driverless vehicle and less aware of your actions while on the road? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ba9f1c247563,69D18D73D53A,"Technology is everywhere these days. In our pockets, on our tables and counters, everywhere we turn. You're using technology right now, as you read this. One of the most important types of technology we have is our cell phones. Everyone from 10-year-olds to 100-year-olds have them. To some people, it's just to connect with friends, to others, it's what their whole career depends on it. Either way, cell phones are a key element in today's society.
+
+Teenagers, out of everyone, are typically the age group that most depends on their cell phones. Whether it's just for talking to friends, communicating with their boss, or speaking with their family, there's no denying it. Teenagers love their cell phones. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ed2e3614b1b0,69D18D73D53A,"
+Despite their obvious dependence on them, teenagers are often banned from having phones in school. Although I could understand some concern, I believe this should not be the case at any school. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4af11aa4e598,69D18D73D53A,"In order to prove they're responsible, they must be given some responsibility. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d74c8910ae2c,69D18D73D53A,One reason students should be allowed to have phones is in case there is an emergency. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1bada77f8826,69D18D73D53A,"If something terrible were to happen to a students family, they should be able to contact the student immediately. How could they do so without a cell phone? This also true if it were backwards, and there was an emergency at school. If something were to happen that left the school's administration physically unable to hell the students, how could students get help? With cell phones, they would be able to contact their families and emergency medical services. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ab66a49fde1,69D18D73D53A,Another reason students should be allowed to have cell phones in school is the fact that schedules are constantly changing ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9fc6488b3f70,69D18D73D53A,"Whether it's due to weather, illness, or anything else, plans often get changed in the blink of an eye. If the students don't have cell phones, the administration of the school has to coordinate plans and arrange for a student to have a ride home. With everything else the administration has to do, this seems like a foolish way of doing things. If students had cell phones, each student could individually arrange when and where to have their ride pick them up. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7329229de912,69D18D73D53A,"Clearly, there are many important reasons students should be permitted to bring thier cell phones to school. They make planning easier and can easily be the difference between life and death itself in an emergency. They are a wonderful piece of techn ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bfd3a4fe678a,6A088E8BBE02,I believe that the electoral college should not be kept because it is an unfair system of voting. There are flaws in the electoral college system that make it an unfair system to choose our president. ,Position,Effective,,,
+75e65157e29a,6A088E8BBE02,Some of the things that are wrong with the electoral college are that voters can't control whom their electors vote for ,Claim,Effective,,,
+54bbc0b9410f,6A088E8BBE02,in case of a tie there is not a fair way to pick the president ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e6c630393d7d,6A088E8BBE02,the winner-take-all system is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e8059c386fd3,6A088E8BBE02,"In the electoral college voters aren't essentially voting for a president but they are voting for a group of electors who will then elect a president. The electors can be picked in many different ways. Sometimes they are they are picked at state conventions, they can be picked at state party's central committe, or sometimes the presidental canidate picks them themselves according to Bradford Plumer (source 2). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43703177225b,6A088E8BBE02,Plumer says that voters can't always control who their electors vote for and sometimes voters get confused on who to vote for. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5247aa37457f,6A088E8BBE02,"In the case of a tie, the electoral college would yet again be an unfair system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+96007b5deb08,6A088E8BBE02,"If there was a tie in the election, the election would be given to the House of Representatives. In that election, each state has only one vote. So a state with a bigger population has the same say than a state with a smaller population. According to Plumer, because many voters vote one party for president and another party for Congress, the House's selection will not entirely reflect the will of the people. A tie in the electoral college is possible beacause the amount of electoral votes is 538 which is an even number (source 3). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d74ffc238b08,6A088E8BBE02,The electoral college is also unfair to voters because of the winner-takes-all system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a401f1a507d,6A088E8BBE02,The winner-takes-all system awards all the electors to the winning presidential canidate (source 1). According to Plumer because of the winner-takes-all system canidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning (source 2). ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+936ed1a49ce9,6A088E8BBE02,"Counterclains suggest that because the election depends on the vote of swing states, voters there are more thoughtful and should be the ones to decide how the election goes (Richard A. Posner, source 3). ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+415c59f06223,6A088E8BBE02,"The comment that voters in swing states are more thoughtful is vague (not all voters in swing states have to be media literic), and it is unfair to other states if only the swing states are important to the canidates. Other states will not get enough and fair information about the presidental canidates. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5fa5a0425e50,6A088E8BBE02,"In total, the electoral college is an unfair way to choose our presidents. The method has a lot of bias and doesn't give a fair voice to all the states and its voters. The method has a lot of flaws and is a non-democratic way to elect our presidents.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea6b910154aa,6A099CADF367,"After doing some background research on the theme of the electoral college, i have realized that this system is wrong and should be changed ",Position,Adequate,,,
+aa3e60f54734,6A099CADF367,What the electoral college does is basically a chain of votes. Meaning someone votes for someone and then that someone votes for another someone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2290f355458,6A099CADF367,"This may seem confusing, and personally i think it is! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+396c40806dd8,6A099CADF367,Why vote for a slate of electors when we could vote for the president. I mena is like skipping a step of the sequence(a very complex sequence) ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+689ce9dd8e49,6A099CADF367,"dont you think its easier, faster, better and less confusing to just vote for the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7708d30085f4,6A099CADF367,"Every single citizen votes for who they want. thats why i propose an idea. this idea is easier, faster and better... ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2419c73d7063,6A099CADF367,Mr/Ms Senator lets apply the election by popular vote system. its less confusing and less biased ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1d9d7789f61,6A099CADF367,"For ex. if u want to vote for ""Tim Hart""for president, you just have to vote simple right; now using the other system you have to vote for the group of democtratic people that is voting for Tim Hart. And then hope that they didnt steal your vote, and they voted for another candidate. You see what im saying her. The system of popular election vote is way safer than the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be3e4e39aafe,6A099CADF367,"Also this system is more equal than the other, speaking of the problem of small states. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffb222845d7d,6A099CADF367,"Ex ""large states gets more attention form presidential candidates than a small state does""(4 big states, P 21 L 10). This shows that the electoral college system is unequal. Now in the other hand with our system , no matter small or large states, everyone will get the same attencion. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c9dc6117d97,6A099CADF367,"To conclude this essay the election by popular vote is clearly safer, faster, better and more equal than the electoral college, this is why i ask you if you could just think about the idea, and share the word with your collics and people you know ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c4d2101b9cc3,6A11844C8AD2,This is from the NASA facility er do not have fool proof on what made the crator in mars we don't have full evidence on what happend on mars. The face on mars is a mystery and very intersting phnominon and leads to very meracisly things in the future but for futher notice we cant say it was aliens. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+28b6d99315aa,6A11844C8AD2,NASA scientist dont believe that this was alien trying to send a signal or a message to us for all we know a astroid may hit mars and we didnt know. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a9a050e6c1e,6A11844C8AD2,On the flip side people and scientis have belived and wondered if aliens are real ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+741995d92423,6A11844C8AD2,"and there is many cases to make people believe there are alien living amungst human along with movies, games, and toys. We are all fasinated by space and still think aliens are real and some think that aliens are not real. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+37e9bedb1ddc,6A11844C8AD2,We may never know what amde the face on mars if it was aliens or just rocks making shadows and if we ever find out why there was a face it will be a sight to see in the near future.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6bed396c49e7,6A59D543AE54,i think you should just keep it the same ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a790dfe5aacd,6A59D543AE54,because then people will get confused. If you change to election by popular vote people will just be confused ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdc623ce2a0d,6A59D543AE54,according to artcile 1 elctoral college consist of 538 electors. and a majority of 270 elcortal votes is required to elect the president. According to 23rd admendment of the consititution the district of columba is allocated 3 elctors. each canidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of elctors. they can be either deicranditate or republic. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2312b9d0138b,6A59D543AE54,"According to the second artlice under the elctoral college system, voters tates vote for one person thevote not for the president. in second passage it says the single best agrument against the elctoral college is what we might call disator factor. in artilce 2 it say at most basic level , the elctoral college is unfair to voters. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4a960f31205,6A59D543AE54,so with that being said i think i would be against colloege elctoral because it is unfair. why would u agree with a thing that is not fair ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5f3c0ffcb1f3,6A59D543AE54,"the elctoral college is unfair, outdated,and irrational. so thats why i would not choise elctoral vote. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e193799aa3f2,6A59D543AE54,in the 3 section it shows the number pf votes given to eah state. not ever state gets same number of votes as others some only have couple of votes. to me i thi nk each state shoukld have same amount of vote so its fair .because if all big so then it would be unfair. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f091dba587a,6A7C43E28A55,There was an funny looking landform on Mars. That other scientist had tooken a picture of in 1976 and mars that look like a face icon. the picture was blurry and we couldnt really tell what it was so many people had did research on it. Many scientist like me and different people thought it was different things. Like just a regular natural landform in Mars and others think it is a face that a lien had left there to show a icon. We also had a arguent over what it really was. Me as a scientist and other people that thought it was a icon that aliens marked. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+69cf6679be6f,6A7C43E28A55,"I, as a scientist disagree about what many people think it is. I personally think its just a regular natural landmark in Mars. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+da580acba680,6A7C43E28A55,Others think its a icon for something a alien made because its shaped as a face a few scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. Some people think the face is nonafide evidence of real life on Mars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d7440555ff07,6A7C43E28A55,"Us scientist had describe the icon which resembles a human head . its formed bve shawdows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and a mouth. This have attracted alot of people attention to Mars. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aa77626e174e,6A7C43E28A55,"This icon have became very popular. For example in pargargraph 5 its says "" its starred in Hollywood Films, appeared in books, magazines, and is in radio talk shows. This shows that the icon is really popular and many people know and talk about the icon. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07f31a7c61d6,6A7C43E28A55,Around April 5 in 1998 Mars global flew over Cydonia for the first time and took a better picture of the icon for we can tell what ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+beca96934551,6A7C43E28A55,it was more cleary then the other pictures they had. We discovered that it was just a natural landforn and there wasnt no alien icon. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1135bb248ac,6A7C43E28A55,"
+There was nothing else really said about the natural landform because we know what it is now but we also know that its not essay to target Cydonia. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+993ea5ace0a0,6A8D21EBA6DB,"With technology advancing you can drive your own car like how you see them in the movies. Technology is advancing to the point of driverless cars and they will be seen more in the near future. Though severl might think that having driverless cars can be dangerous, the technolgy advancing will make it to where you might not have to buy a car in the future ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+510672042c38,6A8D21EBA6DB,"Driverless will be safe to drive on the roads even without a driver. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+d678ef87ca45,6A8D21EBA6DB,Sensors on the car can keep you from danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+28da8af27fdb,6A8D21EBA6DB,"Sensors are nothing new, but with the technology advancing since the 1980s automakers can make a car that allows far better responce and control than a human driver. With futher improvments on computer hardware and sensors, automakers can design car that can handle more driving tasks on their own. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3cb403b0e6d8,6A8D21EBA6DB,The anitlock brake and driver assticance system has made its own way on helping the full invention of driverless cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2e7ef0296963,6A8D21EBA6DB,"Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project, believes that with the technolgy progressing consumers can have a driverless cab take us wherever we would like to go. Along with the sensors the radar will help with the antilock system to make that dream come ture.
+
+BMW has already annouced the development of ""Traffic Jam Assistant"". It's a car the can handle driving up to 25 mph, but touch sensors keeps the driver holding the wheel in case of a malfunction. The human driver must remian alert and be able to take over in certain situations. Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+721c8b25c884,6A8D21EBA6DB,Several may argue that a driverless car is not safe. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1f02bd3daa3f,6A8D21EBA6DB,A variety of car companies have and are developing safety devices to assure the safety of everyone. GM has developed driver’s seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Automakers and manufacturers are assuring your safety while deveopling the future. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ac17ce89cb72,6A8D21EBA6DB,"Safety is the number one key to the adevances of driverless cars. From sensors, antilock brake and driver assistance systems, and development for the advanced technology; automakers and manufacturers are assuring your safety. That is why they are developing the technology further to insure that consumers are safe while they have made technological advances. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1a8060d836f5,6A91EB21FE91,"Cars were ment to be many things, comfortable, muscle, work, luxury, cheap, and fun for a lot of people. The new cars that they are making should only have safety features that are computer, not the whole car. If a whole car was a computer, what would you do, sit there and eat? you wouldnt be paying attention, you'd be all relaxed, and probably sleeping if you were tired. There are many things that i can say are bad for being in a car that is a computer with a frame, an engine, exhaust manifold, and many more parts. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ddf6444184c9,6A91EB21FE91,That is why i disagree/ dislike the fact to have a computer drive you. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5067e82c1d35,6A91EB21FE91,"The facts are that there are people building cars that are partially computer driven. For the car that could be bad or good, but if it faults you wont be able to know until it acctually faults while driving which is a huge safety hazard. The car is made for teens, and grown-ups to have fun and comfort or one of them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2028a5407e83,6A91EB21FE91,The reasons I dislike/ disagree with the self drving is that everybody would become lazy/ on unintellegent about cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09f1324018e2,6A91EB21FE91,"So on my behalf the cars shouldnt be self driven and should have people at the wheels. If the safety features are computer, and not faulty then keep them because it's better to be safe then sorry on the road with idiot drivers, drunks, first time drivers, and semi drivers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+856ba55c4472,6A988A538ED8,"I actually find that to be a wonderful idea. I mean just think about it usually students don't care, they just think ""Oh, Well I can play Football with whatever grades I might get."" Well If you make that brand new school policy you might see an extraordinary change in the grades for kids. ",Position,Effective,,,
+bcd6c00a1109,6A988A538ED8,"You might see students walking around school thinking about sports or other activities ,and that will be the only thing that they will be having on their mind. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+de11835ef8d6,6A988A538ED8,"So, Instead of thinking about how to make sure you got your quiz right ,they will be thinking about their sports. Have you even ever seen a kid and a sport they love together? They are like glue. That is why we should just keep P.E. and that will be the exercise for the day! You don't have to think about no exercise if we have P.E.. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e252cc10a56,6A988A538ED8,If you make that school policy I am sure it will make a huge difference in our grade point average. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eb12fc542e08,6A988A538ED8,"I know that when I play a sport and I love I can't stop thinking about it and eventually my grades will just drop ,it is like I am a Leaf in the fall. Also, It isn't very pleasant going home and showing my parents my report cards if I failed any class. My grades started going up as soon as I had quit softball, trust me it makes a big difference in the grades. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3af1b6038850,6A988A538ED8,"I like sports, yes they are fun but you don't need them all of the time. A B average is a very good achievement for some students ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ffc7fd3d4e8,6A988A538ED8,"It will be great to go home and show you parents you got all A' s and B' s. I love coming home and watching my parents be so proud of me , sometimes they even get me something to show me how proud they are. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+008cf42d39ef,6A988A538ED8,"So, as you can see getting A' s and B' s is a very good thing, and I can't wait to see the better grades, If you make that new policy ofcourse. Thank you for listening to me you will do a magnificent job choosing, I am sure. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5bfc62343a68,6AB345CECE0B,"To be honest we should not keep the Electoral College because there unfair, outdated, and irrational. There unfair to citizens and the states who vote ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c68796d89f5f,6AB345CECE0B,I think all the electors care about is just the winnings from the presidential candidate. I would like to call the Electoral College the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a87662d4a877,6AB345CECE0B,"I agree in Mr. Plumber saying. Bradford Plumber said in his writing of The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wong, ""In the vein, ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for there party's candiate and caste a deciding vote for whomever they please...."" I think there heartless. That's another reason why I don't like them. Now look all they care about is themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+156489013be0,6AB345CECE0B,"I pretty sure most of the voters or the states don't know this but did you know when we the voters ""vote for the presidental canidate"" we're actually voting for a slate of electors? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97ffc58ae5b8,6AB345CECE0B,"Electoral College lack democratic pedigree, also there practical reason, liberal and conservative reason. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6cbcb8cef826,6AB345CECE0B,"What I found out that is also not fair is to the citizens and state who vote, is that the winning candiate's share his share of popular vote with the Electoral College. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2c68e5a1224a,6AB345CECE0B,"First of all, we voted for the candiate not for the electoral. We don't know the electoral. Knowing this, we the citizens just might not vote anymore. The electoral is not sharing the presidential house, we choose one person to look up too. Not the greedy electoral. Some states don't even vote anymore because they know that there vote has no effect ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ac92d694fde,6AB345CECE0B,It's hard to say this but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the Electoral College! ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f06efdd47db1,6AD64F9A9437,You should require all students to perform community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+10fc8251b6ea,6AD64F9A9437,because not only does it protect the environment it protects future generations and our community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+29c8e53b0998,6AD64F9A9437,"For example say people were not taking care of the environment and throwing their garbage and littering in our rivers and streams, which leads to our drink water it would then be contaminated and the contamination of the water wouldn't just effect humans it would effect plants and animals as well. Or say that we were not recycling, all of our garbage would do straight to landfill's which would once again put humans, plants and animals in danger. Or perhaps we were letting the oil from our cars run out into streams and driving our car to places that we could easily walk to or letting the carbon monoxide from our cars pollute the air leaving more of a chance for global warming to happen. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+52da29f53836,6AD64F9A9437,"All of this can be prevented if we just take thirty minutes out of our day and pick up loose trash in our neighborhood or park or just as simple as recycling plastics, papers, cardboards, glasses etc. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+52ff12f5aea4,6AD64F9A9437,Also students want have to worry about taking time away from hanging out with their friends because their friends can do it with them and they would be getting more done in half of the time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b78ade08693,6AD64F9A9437,This plan will work if you put it into action and I strongly hope you take my request into recommendation. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6d5a1cd7d85b,6AFC2BA228ED,"After reading this story/argument i think we should remove the Electoral college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7a3ab6635533,6AFC2BA228ED,"Because i think we shoud be able to have the final vote, not the electoral voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+37f834412c40,6AFC2BA228ED,"It states in paragraph 15 that ""it is the electors who elect the president, not the people."" ""when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" (paragraph 15) the reason why is cause they vote on the more who has the responsibility on taking part as president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed5d8c2a89ba,6AFC2BA228ED,"The electoral college has 538 electors and about 270 electoral vote are required to elect president. There is one member of the house in your state of representatives also 2 for your senate. But in the district of columbia therenis allocated 3 electors that are treated like a state. This election is held every four yearson the Tuesday after the first Monday of November. So when you vote, you dont vote for the whivh presidnt your actualy voting for the candidtes electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7da0131e58e,6AFC2BA228ED,"""It is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win national popular vote. But in the year 2000, Gore had more popular votes then Bush,and Bush had less fewer electoral votes. This yet has not happened very rarely, but it was the first time ever since 1888."" That only happened cause the elctoral votes made it happen. some informstion i put up there is to inform you what they do and how many votes are required to elect president compared to the thousands of people voting for the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b0f44cbe832,6AFC2BA228ED,I say that the electoral college is unfair! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2727331ec11d,6AFC2BA228ED,The first is cause they lost the presidency the year 2000 with Gore and Bush ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb3c1368b4f4,6AFC2BA228ED,Second of all people who favored the seperation of race. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b25d7db984e,6AFC2BA228ED,"We, people shoud be able to vote on the president to make our vote count! Not on just voting for the electors the elect the president. Let our votes be heard to the people not the just the elctoral college.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+05a5b4ac3b2a,6B0FE655BCD1,"I'm writing to you today regarding my concerns on our voting method for the president of the United States. Although we've been voting by the electoral college for how ever many years, I don't think it is the most efficient and fair way of voting. Our Chamber of Commerce, former vice president Richard Nixon and many more would have to agree with me when I say that ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ab4e72aa99ea,6B0FE655BCD1,abolishing the electoral college could only be beneficial to us. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bf0bbcc7c373,6B0FE655BCD1,The electoral college system is unfair ,Claim,Effective,,,
+848fff2d7fa5,6B0FE655BCD1,confusing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a68ab839b42a,6B0FE655BCD1,"forces people to compromise. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab4ab8286d61,6B0FE655BCD1,"The electoral college is unfair, being that voters don't always control who their electors vote for, opposed to election by popular vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+651ffb732169,6B0FE655BCD1,"One reason why America strives is the fact that we are a democracy, where every one gets a say and we are not ruled by a dictators or communist. The electoral college in no way follows our democratic system, the people are not voting for our president our electors are the ones voting for us. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f11802abadaa,6B0FE655BCD1,Not only is the electoral college unfair but it is also confusing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab00a23d59c9,6B0FE655BCD1,"For new voters they may be confused by the eletoral college. New voters may wonder why can't I just vote for the candidate I most prefer. Think about it like this, in the electoral college the electors are the middle man. Why not cut the middle man out? And as a result make the voting system much simpler. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d1dd46d2634,6B0FE655BCD1,People may agrue that the electoral college system stops a majority vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b0b58b1c6982,6B0FE655BCD1,"So let's say, you're a democrat living in the state of Texas with the electoral college system in place. You might as well not vote for an elector cause the majority of the people in texas are going to vote for the republican elector. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f29ad71f0308,6B0FE655BCD1,"On the other hand, there is the election by popular vote, gives everyone a say in whom they'd like to vote for. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c1167b21bca3,6B0FE655BCD1,There is always the possibility of the disater factor. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+647354d2a6ce,6B56C630FFC5,"This is my opinion of your future change in the school activities. I'm not in favor in this change, if the students are good players, the principal have to let they play at least they have a grade C average, but if the students don't have a good grade, like F or D, the principal have to tell they that they can't play anymore, till they make a good grade. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+4fb6ac45e066,6B56C630FFC5,"
+This change can do a good change ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb1752d757ba,6B56C630FFC5,"because the students that play a sport or if they are in the band, and if they care more in the activity that they play, maybe that can be distorting the student, that can be the reason of why they don't have good grades, so the students what the students have to study at the same with their sport or other activity, and be good with both ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a67c5545e67,6B56C630FFC5,". Maybe the students are better in their activity because sometimes we have more fun, and because we like to be in more movement. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd2f2015d6bc,6B56C630FFC5,"I have to tell that the idea of tell us about this cange and for give us the opportunity to let us tell you, our opinion is good. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f61c157c1371,6B6A7138292B,The electotral college doesnt work in my opinion ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f42f759db0bc,6B6A7138292B,It has too many flaws such as you are voting for a state ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a72a70c41947,6B6A7138292B,Thanks to the electoral college the 2000 election was a disaster ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ed98937a36cc,6B6A7138292B,The electoral college system is unfair in a way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cba5426f407,6B6A7138292B,"because if your from some where with a lot of points your going to win that state. And if you win lots of small states it doesnt matter because someone can win two big states and beat you. Obviously candidates arent going to spend a lot of time in a state they know they have no shot of winning.
+
+In 2000 17 states didnt get to see any candidates, because the candidates didnt consider them big states.
+
+On the off chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors in the first place? It dopends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the states partys central comitee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d4b7c8ba699,6B6A7138292B,The electotral college doesnt work in my opinion. It has too many flaws such as you are voting for a state. Thanks to the electoral college the 2000 election was a disaster. The electoral college system is unfair in a way because if your from some where with a lot of points your going to win that state. And if you win lots of small states it doesnt matter because someone can win two big states and beat you. Obviously candidates arent going to spend a lot of time in a state they know they have no shot of winning.          ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e478677c7bcc,6BBD726B840E,Im agree with the Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9b3402c28044,6BBD726B840E,"A dipute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it happened in 2000, but it's likely than a dispute over the popular vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed41909701ac,6BBD726B840E,"The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. For example, President Obama recive 61.7 percent of the electoral votes copared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes for him and for Romney. Because the total number of votes 538 is an even number, but it is highly unlikely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58200276d201,6BBD726B840E,"The winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates,  to focus on their campaign; the voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the competing candidates. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+960912303579,6BBD726B840E,The electoral college restores some of the weigth on the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e34330aceef5,6BBD726B840E,"The most popular vote was in Florida in 2012. Who won the vote, got 29 electoral votes. So other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates ina campaign tahn a small state. Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the  Electoral College the 301 and 370 electoral votes, repectively. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e78a6851be1,6BBD726B840E,"There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which of would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b8197ea1b20f,6BBD726B840E,"Democrats in Texas, and Reublicans in California. Thir vote no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the compaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. But of course  no voter's vote swings a national election, about one-half the elegible American population did vote in 2012's election.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05bbe833670e,6BEDE1C49244,I don't think it is right that you need to have a b average because some people cant mentally and fiskley do it . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2391c014f514,6BEDE1C49244,"Sometime out can not get your grades all up to passing in time. also i am not good at school but i still try.
+
+I think i should get the right to play sport because sports can be job when you get older and it will also keep you in shape just not that but aliened.
+
+So based on behavior i think they could not be able to play but just not because of bad grades. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7bca55c6082,6BEDE1C49244,So i was wondering if you would considered not letting theses kids play sports because the don't have a bee average. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ed241d8a0399,6C014506F9A2,My opinion would have to be Policy 2 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fdf7b6b91a33,6C014506F9A2,you are at school to learn for a better education and not to be texting your friends during lunch ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+856b92d0c420,6C014506F9A2,probably four fifths of your friends are all ready at school and why would you want to text them if you are sitting by them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+06335f0d4c75,6C014506F9A2,Another reason is that if you give kids an opportunity to text during lunch then they would take advantage of texting and they would text during the school day and not pay attention in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c31e487d3343,6C014506F9A2,If it was my opinion I would not have cell phones in my pocket so i can call my mom when i get to school otherwise you do not need your phone to text during school hours. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f18ba46378d5,6C014506F9A2,That is my opinion on have weather to have your phone on for lunch or not having your phone on at all during the school day. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6a2ae0ce441a,6C1C86ECD6BC,I would rather take a joint to the community service. Helping people could be better for the world so it will cause less stress and have a better environment ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b3c0a520b9fc,6C1C86ECD6BC,Students should require to do this service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+67f4d0a7f66d,6C1C86ECD6BC,to let them know they're doing something very helpful to the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fa1beaf5384,6C1C86ECD6BC,By being helpful you can get an award for future use or you can be very proud of yourself and let other people around you be proud of you too ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f75d1fd0d490,6C1C86ECD6BC,Cleaning up trash is a helpful way to serve community service ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11931852ae05,6C1C86ECD6BC,"This will make the environment a cleaner place, and also safer. No animal, fishes, and humans should be injured if we clean up the trash and never liter again. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5cbbd2ea2c8c,6C1C86ECD6BC,"Tutoring someone who is struggling with a certain project, homework, etc; can really help with their education. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+733a04d2cb8d,6C1C86ECD6BC,"They could have a better grade if someone offered to tutor to.
+
+Teaching the people who are younger and less knowledgeable will let them know what's going on, or what to do for future use. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+786c9c043606,6C1C86ECD6BC,Making a charity for the homeless people ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b6b11762ba5a,6C1C86ECD6BC,"Knowing if there's someone with a family who is out on the streets trying to be alive is just sad. People can do concerts, plays, and just washing people cars could help earn money for he charity. By doing this, you could be helping lots of other people who needed shelter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6.52472257E+043,6C1C86ECD6BC,Recycling is a way to also help the community ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c84e71960efd,6C1C86ECD6BC,"There's tons and tons of water bottles that have been used and not been thrown correctly in the right bin. By recycling , the stuff that are able to recycle can be used over and over again. Trees could be saved by recycling so we don't to kill the animal's home and let them be homeless. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb0aeb1ac070,6C1C86ECD6BC,Mostly the main reasons on helping the community is to make the people around you feel very helped. You would also feel very appreciated knowing there's people who will also help you back. Which is why, I would rather be helping the community than laying down do nothing when there's something needed to be changed. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,
+684bb7a080d3,6C2348EA83BB,"Dear, state senator I think changing elections by popular vote for the president of the United States would be better. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d322653b27b4,6C2348EA83BB,Each candidate had his or her group of electors. Mostly the political party like Democratic and Republican. he Electoral college is the established Constitution as a compromise between electionof the presdident by vote in congress. Popular votes for the election of the president is more meaningful then having 538 electors and 270 electoral votes. I think the electoral college doesn't work. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d136a742c93,6C2348EA83BB,"In the electoral college system,voters just vote for the president, but along with that your voting for more electors in their political party. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c05f411c0d2f,6C2348EA83BB,This is a very big deal for the people voting in elections. They have no control of whom their electors votr for. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf03a7532a53,6C2348EA83BB,The electoral college is also unfair to the canidates because the winner-take-all system in each state. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38e07648729a,6C2348EA83BB,"The best arguments in favor is the popular vote, but some canidates still lose from the presidency. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9894485791d,6C2348EA83BB,Looking at the breakdown of the number of electoral votes given to each state-California has the most votes. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+da1c4519bf2e,6C2348EA83BB,"or instance, as Romney was in the South he had no campaign heavily in those states. He gained no electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1931835463ba,6C2348EA83BB,In toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-to really take notice inthe competing canidates. Those voters sre the ones to decide the election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b0c126bf33a,6C2348EA83BB,"Run-Off elections should be avoided, it would greatly complicate the presidential election process. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d78bccf8a7d7,6C2348EA83BB,"My advice to you;as the state senator is to not keep the Electoral College. The election of the populae vote would be more precised. It's maybe 1% unfair because in states like california they have like 55,000 republicans voting for 1 canidate. And if there's a tie in the electoral vote, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.                                                            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+81c735cda3ee,6C30C0076FAD,"""Knowledge is power,"" the esteemed Francis Bacon once said. Those words, repeated verbatim for ages, are the foundation of education, for as long as education serves to teach and inspire. However, there is an arising problem where students are unable to focus on their schooling due to external factors such as holding jobs or taking care of their families. This phenomenon causes harm to the future academic aspirations of these students and is wholly detrimental to their education. As per federal law, all children in the United States, from the ages of five to eighteen, are legally required to attend school. However, for those students who must serve a purpose other than studying, having to spend hours of their day at a physical school can actually severely affect their ability in both educational and non-educational pursuits. Although this situation may seem dire, there exists a surprisingly simple solution that can adequately meet all the needs of these students: distance learning. Distance learning is a program by which students are afforded the option of doing their coursework from home by taking online courses. By providing a feasible alternative to traditional schooling, distance learning will allow students to do better in all facets of their lives. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+418f31664a2c,6C30C0076FAD,Distance learning would be a massive benefit to students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1bbc549511ab,6C30C0076FAD,because it would allow schedule flexibility ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08783c59ee7f,6C30C0076FAD,"encourage student independence, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+67d0837e13ba,6C30C0076FAD,"While a work-life balance seems to be the cornerstone of happiness for any American worker, the same does not seem to be true for American students. In a 2016 study published by Psychology Today, it was found that the stress level of students had risen nearly 15% since 2012. This, in tandem with the fact that many high school students work part-time or even full-time jobs on the side is the exact reason why distance learning must be implemented: schedule flexibility. If students are able to shape their educational schedules to meet their unique independent needs, then the mental health of those students would doubtlessly improve. In fact, in a TED talk about a similar brand of tutelage entitled ""hack schooling"", it was discussed how the alternative method allowed for students to feel more secure about their learning as it was being done on their own terms. This means that if students are allowed the chance to shape their education to suit themselves, they are then able to comprehend the information that they learn rather than simply memorize and regurgitate it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+10b2a18a5b9c,6C30C0076FAD,"By removing unnecessarily strenuous factors such as the long hours and rigidity of traditional schooling, distance learning provides an avenue by which students of all backgrounds and situations are afforded the opportunity to thrive. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0bf03b28ed4e,6C30C0076FAD,"Independence is a trait that empowers all those who possess it as it enables them to function on their own. Between fixed bell schedules and assigned bathroom breaks and a plethora of functional rigidity, independence is rather unfortunately not a trait that is bred well in traditional American schools. However, as students grow to become adults with much more autonomy than is allowed in said schools, this dependency can become malignant to the development of their own psyches. Giving students the ability to attend a distance learning program is something that can, in turn, teach students to become more independent and self-reliant. Between managing their own time, finishing their coursework, and learning to use their online resources wisely, students will gain a learning curve which will lead them to be vastly more independent than they would have been in a traditional school setting. Take, for example, students who complete online courses via the Generic_School program in the Generic_City school district. In the form to apply for courses, students are asked how they demonstrate independence and ability to manage their coursework. As distance learning demands more in terms of organization than traditional schooling does, it is clearly vital for students to be, or at least to learn to be, more independent. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dc2bfda01a20,6C30C0076FAD,"by taking these courses, students will display an increase in independence and autonomy that they would not necessarily experience in a traditional setting. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2e0418bb42fe,6C30C0076FAD,"Despite the many bonuses that distance learning offers, there is something that can be said about the social aspect of traditional public schooling. By forcing students to interact with one another, traditional schools facilitate social interactions between peers. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5393064b5e92,6C30C0076FAD,"While performing this function does seem to advantage traditional schools, it is not necessarily a bad thing for distance schooling. In fact, students are quite often put in social situations outside of a school setting. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e527f75793a6,6C30C0076FAD,"Whether interacting with family or speaking to friends, students experience social interaction rather often in their lives. Additionally, as many distance learning programs use video conferences as a means to teach, they can provide a means to teach further social and emotional interaction as well. Schools are not the only means by which students may develop social skills, and distance learning would genuinely not hinder any sort of societal interaction or ability that traditional schools seemingly provide. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4b0eaba1165,6C30C0076FAD,"In summation, schools should implement distance learning as it serves as a vital benefit to students who genuinely cannot gain from traditional forms of education. By allowing for flexible schedules, distance learning provides a feasible alternative to students who cannot perform their tasks within the confines of traditional schools. By encouraging independence, distance learning empowers students to learn discipline and organization in addition to traditional academia. Knowledge is indeed power, and with the knowledge that educators have about distance learning, they must now enable students to experience first hand how distance learning can benefit them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+715fc2b5a11b,6C3E863C67FC,"As we should know, ""the Electoral College is a process not an actual place. It serves as a compromise of the presidential election in Congress and by popular vote"" (paragraph 1). It can be good at times but most times it has its downfalls. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+04c9409d6a56,6C3E863C67FC,The Electoral College doesn't allow for a direct election compared to popular vote. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cde592782064,6C3E863C67FC,"Also, there isn't a fair number of votes for each presidential candidate per state. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb3ffd84a95f,6C3E863C67FC,If there is a tie in the electoral voting process it can cause a big disaster. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7c1b57417c7f,6C3E863C67FC,I don't believe that anyone wants constant problems when choosing a leader. To avoids all of the problems why not take the Electoral College out overall ,Position,Effective,,,
+9c9d2e7c13f9,6C3E863C67FC,"""Under the electorial college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" (Paragraph 10). In actuality, voters don't directly vote for the president when it comes to the electoral college. Although the Electoral College ""restores some of the weight in the polititcal balance that large states lose by virtue of mal-apportionment"", (paragraph 21) voters don't have the right to control whom their electors are said author Bradford Plumer. Voting for a group of electors doesn't always mean that they'll vote for the candidate in which you favor. This can have a huge affect on the reputation of the Electoral College itsself. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+75b9050b6b66,6C3E863C67FC,It's not only an indirect election but it's also an unfair election. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+608cfb5851ec,6C3E863C67FC,"The number of entitled electors per state is based upon the members of the state's congressional delegation. ""One for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your senators."" (paragraph 3). This is unfair because the number of ""House"" members is based on the states overall population compared to the amount of senators. It may somehow be good for the residents who beleive their votes doesn't count becasue of the candidate's regional appeals but what about those who fear that their electors won't choose the candidate in which they favor. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb2467628362,6C3E863C67FC,"Not only is it indirect and unfair, but it can cause disaster to arise if there is a tie within the electoral voting process. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1f6df629e365,6C3E863C67FC,"If there is a tie in the in the electoral vote ""the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives"" (paragraph 12). This is an unfair method also becasue now there's only one vote per state and some states have a higher population than others which can and will cause contreversy in the public. ""The pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, may be redcued"" (patagraph 22) but it still doesn't reduced the fact that swing voters can cause catastrophe within the electoral voting process. This is because they are the most targeted voting areas due to their reputations as the ""most thoughtful voters"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4052c7f866e4,6C3E863C67FC,"All in all, the Electoral college has both its good things and their downfalls. As can be seen the bad out ways the good in this situation. A voters vote isn't necessarily direct because they aren't voting on a single representative, they are voting on a group of individuals in which they believe will vote for the candidate in which they choose. Also, being that the number of electors is based on a state's number of congressional represenatives it is an unequal and unfair number of electors per state. The electoral college can even cause an uproar if a tie ever falls in place because the ""tie breaker"" is left in the hands of the House of Representatives. Basically ""the electoral colleg is unfair, and irrational"" (paragraph 14) and it should be abolished because there is a great amount of mix ups and failures within the system itself.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c4ce39f83858,6C50FC009033,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d7705c093461,6C50FC009033,we should get rid of the Electoral College for many reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4d8a34b5d66d,6C50FC009033,One reason is that small states do not get any attention from the upcoming presidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1e8253b4eb0,6C50FC009033,"because their electoral votes for the small states are to small like Alaska only has 3 electoral votes unlike California which has 55 electoral votes so the upcoming presidents can just not even think about the small states and go for bigger states like Florida, Texas, and California. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de17b125f1e0,6C50FC009033,"People say ""The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" and Bob Dole said ""Abolish the electoral college."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f33ca00e3334,6C50FC009033,"Many things can go wrong in the electoral college like their can be a tie in the sytem where is would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c51eda38ee0,6C50FC009033,"Another reason is what some people call the disaster factor, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f034c73dc9b,6C50FC009033,"consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. who would vote for some one to not listen to them and do what they want? then the electoral college is useless in the sense of voting for who you want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c926634af86,6C50FC009033,people say that the electoral college avoids run-off elections ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+16d8740e4c18,6C50FC009033,"however the electoral college is unfair to voters, because of the winner-take-all system in each state. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9b42f768e065,6C5A6D1D0C13,I was meaning to ask you can you please leave the electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+722cd9f98575,6C5A6D1D0C13,In way many people were grateful for this kind art education in many ways people use this place for so long to know how many scarefices that many people choose this area than no other. There got to be a diffrent reason to come in mind for can stop this idea from elimanating this fine place to construct for all years of hard work ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d22f2fccbc8b,6C5A6D1D0C13,For so long many people still would like to choose this college as great example for their success. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3742eea24996,6C5A6D1D0C13,"This my letter to you senator. But if you refuse this than i don't know what i would do,but  what I do know is you choose what it came from your mind I can not stop you from picking the good or bad  choices but I can help you pick the right choice. As well making a election area that only happens in four years is not really worth anything many would disagree for this nonsense build and just forget what just came in mind and pick the right choice ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+483a6062b268,6C60C14AE38A,I believe that the Electoral College should stay in process ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cebd733bc2c7,6C60C14AE38A,because it consists of 538 electors and the majority (270) that are the electoral votes that are required to elect a president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2334eb4eb8af,6C60C14AE38A,"Elector  groups are picked by the runner; the groups help raise votes for the runners to get more word out on what the runner has to offer for our country. Plus, they make sure the elector running, has good legitiment reasons for becomeing our countries representor. With the presidential election held every four years, the Electorial College can be still processing men, and women, who are wanting to represent our country. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2478e8724be5,6C60C14AE38A,"Furthermore, the state elector running for president, is assisted by our votes, because when you vote for your candidates, you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db9cc33d2721,6C60C14AE38A,"Once the presidential election is over, the staes governers start a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" witch list all of the canidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fac6af864eb0,6C991A1A6C39,"Some school offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. the students not focus in home sometime, for the TV, video games, and cell phones. The 20% the students, not go to school because is more difficult, but 80% the students go to school students don't benefit because have a distraction in home the TVs, are distraction or watching movies the students not focus in work in study some not doing a work or copies in internet . ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+78269b639ccc,6C991A1A6C39,Students don't have a friends because not work in groups sometime ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7e4d92fb77cf,6C991A1A6C39,"not distraction with other students and more distraction in home sometime not focus some students said 5% the students not focus in house because the cell phones distract the students not benefit being able to attend classes from home.
+
+The some students story and online because in the morning not necessary take a shower or not wake up late, but some students is more fanny story in school because distract ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+89f6e74a8e19,6C991A1A6C39,"The video conferencing you need to pay for a classes, in work some students have a job, and pay school. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7786d23d167a,6C991A1A6C39,"The students said is more easy go to school for have more friends and you understand more because the teacher explain you went you have a question the teacher explain you or went you have a work and you need help she explain you.
+
+The peoples said is more easy went you story is school because not pay for you education is more fanny one time in here in school the students talking about the school pay but in online some people said is a bad idea some people said is a god idea about this topic.
+
+The students, went you go to school has a library, old the material paper, or notebook, doing homework, and has a lunch, break fast in the morning, and the after noon so you have old the classes for example art, geographic, and music etc. Some students, and some people said is more easy story and the home because some people dont doing a bulling for a skin color.
+
+The video conferencing you need to pay for a classes, in work some students have a job, and pay school.
+
+some school offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. the students not focus in home sometime, for the TV, video games, and cell phones. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1de6bb9bdee6,6C991A1A6C39,The students is not a god idea to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because some students copies a test in home or use a internet for a project or something like that ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2f9b372101f2,6C991A1A6C39,"Connected to, served by, or available through a system and especially a computer or telecommunications system as the internet also done while connected to a system, online shopping. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+73bb943ad587,6C9A5A8FA2F9,I would agree with keeping the Electoral College because its a fair way to elect the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e3024e38b30,6C9A5A8FA2F9,"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors the majority only 270 votes is required for the final dessision. Each candidate running for the president has his or her own group of electors but the state law varys how many are selected. The presidential election is held every four yearson the tuesday after the first monday of november.
+
+The states are called districts for example the word state also refers to the disrict of Columbia. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aa946512dc8a,6C9A5A8FA2F9,You can help choose your states electors when you vote forpresident. Even though your voting for your candidate your really voting for the candidates electors. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e26104b155b,6C9A5A8FA2F9,Most states have a winner takes all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+981382132a03,6C9A5A8FA2F9,After the presidential election your govenor prepares a certificate of ascertainment listing all of your candidates who ran for president in your state. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state at the meeting of the electors in December. Then the certificate is sent to the congress  and the national records of the presidential election.    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5787ed23bac6,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"", the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. How do i feel about driverless cars? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ad48180bb108,6CA3EC0D0FC8,I am against driverless cars for many reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+46616569f93a,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"First, safety will always be a huge concern, especially if the driver is not the one driving the car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d7a775154c4,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"In addition, the production of driverless cars would cost alot so it might come out of the tax payers money. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cbf8d62f8a2d,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"Finaly, I believe that the driverless cars will never be completely driverless ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8239c81b234,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"For a driverless car to be a good idea and be suitable for everybody, it needs to be completely safe for everybody. In the article, the author tells us that most driving laws focus on keeping the drivers, the passengers, and the pedestrians safe. We all know that safety is the most important way, but what is the best way to keep the drivers, the passengers, and the pedestrians safe? The author tells us that lawmakers already know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. How are the drivers going be alert when they are in a drivetless car. What if there is a system malfunction? What if the driver falls asleep while the car is driving itself? The outcomes don't look good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+98a415757049,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"The author asks us a very good question. He asked, ""If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?"" There will people suing the companies because they expected the driverless car to be a safe car and be able to drive itself because it's a driveless car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4254bc4904dc,6CA3EC0D0FC8,This would affect the buyers and manufacturers in a negative way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d99ab880c8f,6CA3EC0D0FC8,The production of driveless cars and the cost to buy driverless cars would cost alot. This would also affect the buyers and the manufacturers in a negative way. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+68730785cef7,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"Finally, even if there was to be a driverless cars, it would not be completely driverless. This would cause concern for the manufacturers and the buyers. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+452833d9ce9a,6CA3EC0D0FC8,"It is true that driverless cars can benefit people, but it can also bring danger and concerns. I am against the development of driverless cars. First, safety will always be a concern. Driverless would not be completely safe because safety is best achieved with alert drivers. The drivers would not be completely alert if they were in a driveless car. In addition, the production and the cost to buy driverless cars would be high. This would cause problems for the manufacturers and the buyers. Finally, even if there was to be a driverless car, it would not be completeyly driverless and unfortunately, it would not be completely safe. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+955023ecad94,6CAE55B3180D,"I have an idea concerning community service.
+
+You probably are considering to make everyone to do community service and I'm on the same track ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a62a7bfe99a5,6CAE55B3180D,In my sight community service is essential. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+772415af0e9e,6CAE55B3180D,Others may not have the time to do something they need done and we can help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4899e0e2d861,6CAE55B3180D,It is also much wiser to help someone in need rather than students at home playing video games or watching television. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b884bee8f68b,6CAE55B3180D,Service helps you feel good inside and have better self esteem and may also help you physically. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+836355e953bf,6CAE55B3180D,"Some single parents don't have time to work, do household jobs, and take care of their kids everyday.
+
+We may not be able to help with their work but we certainly are able to help them with household things.
+
+They would appreciate it and it will help them to feel more relaxed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6393d072ce4d,6CAE55B3180D,That is much more rewarding. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+995a2af08646,6CAE55B3180D,Community service may also help you physically. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cab71f40bf9b,6CAE55B3180D,"Hard work of cleaning or moving things is a way to be active.
+
+The constant effort that you don't realize may be helping your strength and cardio.
+
+Since we have an overweight problem in America it would actually help if we did more service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ffc56176be4,6CAE55B3180D,"Many people now days don't have very high self esteem. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+99198432ceba,6CAE55B3180D,"When you do service for someone else they will probably thank you over and over and say how wonderful you are.
+
+It might actually make you think twice about yourself and try harder because you know someone cares. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c115c82ec8b2,6CAE55B3180D,"I think community service is very important for students to do because it helps other people, it helps you to become physically active, and it may raise your self esteem.
+
+Even though people grumble about doing service it is really important that they do it.
+
+In the end they will be glad they had the chance to do service for some other than themselves.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d03eb27be86,6CE2817B7E7A,"The idea of these ""Driveless Cars"" does sound intersting and at the most fascinating. But however i'm going to say i'm all that for that particular idea for a few reasons ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6c8f6ea3f5bc,6CE2817B7E7A,"I don't see how it would be called ""Driveless Cars"" if there is still human assitance requried ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bb8313acd06,6CE2817B7E7A,To me this isn't all the way driveless driving its more like the car assistaing you most of the time. And this could also cause problems betweem the drivers and the companys responible for these cars . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ab69357c303,6CE2817B7E7A,The way I may see it is why spend thousands of dollars creating something the requries human skills you might as well not even make it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e0ceaa7aba5,6CE2817B7E7A,this creation is something not everyone can afford ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+275762dad237,6CE2817B7E7A,If one driver has this creation but the may not this would most likely lead the driveless car driver to accidently hit the car or drive that has a driveless car there are also still chances of acidents ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0accbba90bea,6CE2817B7E7A,So if not everyone can afford a driveless car why even bring it out for people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb97db899d81,6CE2817B7E7A,manufactures want to use camera to watch the driver can be uncomfortable to the drivers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9414e30294ee,6CE2817B7E7A,having to change laws here and there if this vehical is realsed nto everyone may follow or agree with them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1a6b9637e77,6CE2817B7E7A,There's people now that can't even follow the simple rules of driving. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+210e921c8742,6CE2817B7E7A,this could also lack people's precaution or alterness in any type of car or anywhere else ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bcdbce3904cf,6CE2817B7E7A,"if its times for the driver to do his or hers part what if they are on there cellphone like most days now and when they are alterted they look up and its to late. Its relly important that a person is alert at all times and take their own responibility. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23933c79701b,6CE2817B7E7A,"While the details and positive benefits these ""Driveless Cars"" may sound great but the neagatives can also affect people. And the negatives can also put someone in the chance of danger .    ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f360051baf64,6D70F7B79D16,"Electoral College is a great thing and some people might think its not, but there is some wrong things about it like voters vote not for the president, but for slate of electors who in turn elect the president ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a837267047f9,6D70F7B79D16,I'm not going to keep it because its not a good idea and people want to vote for who they want and not vote just so someone can pick who they want like their choice didn't matter. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a54b3c8a2b7,6D70F7B79D16,My argument against the electoral college is we might call the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b33d4a885b1c,6D70F7B79D16,"The american people consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for mech worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new elecotrs who would oppose John F. Kennedy. ''So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.'' In the same vein, faithless electors have occasionally refused tovote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.
+
+Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. The Senate would choose the vice-president. Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters,would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters. Given that many voters vote one party for preident and another party for Congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c0a0ea965c57,6D757AA2C340,We should definitely strive in keeping the electoral college for so many reasons. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1f0146c8db5f,6D757AA2C340,We need to keep the electoral college because it serves so many purposes in the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d5e6f69efe13,6D757AA2C340,It hepls us decide who our president and vice presidents will be ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ffdfc2709e7,6D757AA2C340,it is a big help on our state workers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0bb6ca102531,6D757AA2C340,And most of the reason that people want to stop it is because they think that some of the nominees arent getting what they deserve. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+bbe4af0d516d,6D757AA2C340,We do understand that they put a lot of work in trying to become president but not everyone can win. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+05ade120b3e7,6D757AA2C340,"And to be fair, after the presidential election is over, our govenor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candiates who ran for president in our state along with the names of their respective electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e22b06b2fdf,6D757AA2C340,"The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. You help choose your states electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are usually voting for your candidates electors.
+
+Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidates political party, but state laws vary on how the elecotrs are selected and what their responsibilities are.
+
+The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense...it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. So when you vote for your president your acually voting for the slate of electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d088bd8a5f8e,6D757AA2C340,Having this Electoral College is so much help to our state workers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ab060a402c5,6D757AA2C340,They dont actually have to do everything now...thanks to the Electoral College. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b35368c0955,6E5F2ED42575,Have you ever dreamed about exploring space? I know I have when wierd shapes or forms appear on things and places in our solar system people believe it aliens or a foriegn species that we know nothing about. Like in 1976 a global surveyor named the Viking snapped a photo of a landform that look likes a face on the planet called Cydonia. Humans always argue among each other over the fact whether it was made by aleins or just a natural landform ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+edfe791c8909,6E5F2ED42575,"It's and natural landform beacause it could of been caused from a piece of another planet branching of and crashing, or regular elements acting apon the planet itself. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dc38122d772a,6E5F2ED42575,"Our solar system is huge there is alot of planets, and more uknown things humans do not know about. Many things can be floating around in outer space from other planet bigger or smaller. The peice of that planet or object broke off of could had of entered Cydonia atmosphere, and caused that landform to exist.
+
+Many things have difrent ways of cleansing, and many other different ways of doing things. We do not know if the planet Cyndia caused the unsual lamdform itself from amy kid of element storms and much more. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+67062bf38bca,6E5F2ED42575,"The planet Cyndia is very rare with the landform it has own it there could be many more planets and unknown things that have rare landforms about them in the big solar system,      ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2526943a8637,6E919842050C,"In all honesty, if it were up to me, I would keep the Electoral College ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d7f454b52f41,6E919842050C,"Because imagaine what a catastrophe it would be if we did not have the Electoral College, how would they count the votes ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8b065d280d03,6E919842050C,"Anybodyvoted on who you wanted to win it go can cheat the number of votes to change the president they are voting for. With the Electoral College you can't do that because,  once you voted who you want to win, it get sent out tothe electors. Who from that point on count how many voted for both of them and decide a winner. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df9a3e53d5d1,6E919842050C,"Now it is possible for somebody to secretly change the names that way but it is a higher stake, or risk to take not having the Electoral College. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cb9ec6950c83,6E919842050C,"Also, it is possible for worker of the Electoral College to make a mistake in countung the counting the votes and to cause a big confussion in the votes but that is very highly impossible, if not impossible. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+110f40974ae3,6E919842050C,"If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fcae324edf7,6E919842050C,"The Electoral College is a widely regarded as an anachrosim, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruledbydeclaring the candidate who receives the most popular vote the winner. Not only that, but a disputeover the outcome of an Elecotral College voteis possible-it happened in 2000- ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+59574818c2e7,6E919842050C,but it is less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5ebea1a56f1b,6E919842050C,"Their are five reasons to retain, or keep the Electoral College. First, it's a certainty of outcome, the winner is everybodys president, it swings states, not only does ig work for little states, but for big ones too, and you can avoid run-off elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f06cda74a2ea,6E919842050C,"So those are my reasons why we should keep the Electoral College, we should not overlook the goods that the Electoral College does to our nation just because of two little bad that can be repaired.                   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+90dc6720b57a,6ECD533A72F4,Driverless cars are the transportation system of the future. Their benefits greatly outweigh those of the current system. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+853cea0f52b7,6ECD533A72F4,"Driverless cars are easily possible to develop, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+98f0a54e3ea7,6ECD533A72F4,"much safer than regular cars, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5f659460fe3c,6ECD533A72F4,have benefits for both people and the environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8dac1e5e3648,6ECD533A72F4,"Driverless cars require sensors which allow them to mimic human reaction to whatever situation might arise while on the road. Sensor technology has been in development and in use since the 1980s, with the introduction of antilock brakes. Using this technology, Google modified a Toyota Prius with several sensors which allows the car to access a 3-D model of its environment. The proper technology to introduce driverless cars is clearly already available to manufacturers. In fact, in 2013, BMW announced the ""Traffic Jam Assistant,"" which allows the car to steer, accelerate, and brake itself. The world is already well on its way to the creation of a truly driverless car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+52a640fb40a6,6ECD533A72F4,"An operating system or machine cannot become tired, frustrated, emotional, angry, or distracted in any way; its judgement is mechanical, and there are no variables of human unpredictability. Most if not all vehicular accidents are caused by some sort of human error in judgement, and driverless cars eliminate this possibility, which is conducive to a much safer driving environment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50cf0a5ec54d,6ECD533A72F4,"A possible cosumer concern might be that with the current model of semi-driverless cars, which still require some human effort, people may get tired or distracted waiting for their turn to drive. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+eff8bbd362c1,6ECD533A72F4,"However, manufacturers are developing an answer to this concern which introduces more safety than a regular driving environment would have. Some manufacturers are introducing in-car displays which turn off instantly when driver assistance is required, which is not possible with a regular cellphone or messaging device. This eliminates any in-car distraction during the driving task, With human error eliminated, driverless cars are much safer than regular ones. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+965013bca4d8,6ECD533A72F4,"Driverless cars can allow people to safely engage in other activities besides driving, allowing them to achieve and accomplish more. Driving can be tiring, and driverless cars eliminate driving as a task for people to complete. Many factors can impair driving ability and prevent one from driving, but with driverless cars, mobility is always possible, and transportation is always accessible. A Google cofounder estimates that driverless cars can eventually eliminate the need for personal cars at all, by introducing a public transportation system of entirely driverless vehicles, and that these vehicles can use half the fuel of current taxis. This can have huge benefits for the environment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3c91dcc76422,6ECD533A72F4,"Driverless cars are a much better alternative to the transportation systems of today. They can and are being devleoped, carry benefits to the environment and to people, and are much safer than regular cars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99e276ec4baa,6EEAB9FBADDF,I think that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e8292ce47eee,6EEAB9FBADDF,Faces on the Earth in common to happend because of lava. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+649b56d0d608,6EEAB9FBADDF,"""The Martian is simlar around the America West"". It can also be a ""lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa adout the some height as the Face on Mars"" according to the last paragraph. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6b0f0c3bd1a,6EEAB9FBADDF,"But we never found lava on Mars? Well we will look for it and how do you think it got on there. And if there is not lava of Mars? Then its might just be a natural land form like mountains on Earth. What if people lived there and got covered in dust like material? I don't think there could be humans of Mars because of the lack of oxygen,food,water and bactreia so there in on way peopel could live on Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+185e96f5124e,6EEAB9FBADDF,These are some reasons that I think that the Face on mars is just a natural landform. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c59be55eeba8,6F0ECB93B03B,I think that the electoral college should stay ,Position,Adequate,,,
+660526454122,6F0ECB93B03B,because the electoral college is a process that with help our country and future problems ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f26957e75553,6F0ECB93B03B,most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ef1b5b06145,6F0ECB93B03B,"After the presidential election, the governor prepares a certificate of ascertainment listing all of the candidates who ran for president in the state along with the names of their respective electors. the state's certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives as part of the official records of the presidential election.
+
+The electoral college consists of 538 electors. each candidate running for president in the state has his or her own group of electors. the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their resonsibilities are. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.
+
+the electroal college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed, however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+36c1f5881b33,6F142E71AEF1,"I beleive that we should throw out the electoral colledge and not use it anymore. Today it is irrelevant and it does not help out the elections, in fact I think it only causes trouble. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+4fe0df7faed1,6F142E71AEF1,The electoral colledge is the last deciding factor of who acuatlly gets president. How is that a democracy? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f87717b155c9,6F142E71AEF1,"The people vote for who they want to in the main election and then by popular vote is usually what party gets to send the electors that would vote for them(source 1 ph 5-8). An example of this is the famous 2000 election. That election Al Gore and George Busch were facing off fo the right to hold office. Now Al Gore had won by popular vote, but instead what happened is the electoral colledge voted in favor of Busch instead of Al Gore(posner  ph16). So this shows that Gore should have won because he had the most votes by the american people, but then the electoral colledge voted someone else. So why did the people even vote if the person they wanted in office did not even make it in. That is why we should do away with the electoral colledge. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f8c7382875a1,6F142E71AEF1,Now if for some reason the majority voted in a really crazy man into office that would completely corupt the government then it would be good too have something else that can change teh vote so that America does not get anymore corrupted. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fb6754502d6e,6F142E71AEF1,"The only problem is how many times would you vote for a crazy person who you know will affect you in a very major way? My guess is not very often. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f4c13fd01f07,6F142E71AEF1,Now there is some perks but they are really only for the losing president. If the pesident did not win all of the popular vote he could have won a lot more swing states than his opponent which help him better in the electoral election(posner ph20). ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+dcdaabc81ac0,6F142E71AEF1,So there is only one way that the electoral colledge is helpful and it is not even to the American voters. This is why we need a change and to get rid of the electoral colledge. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c23a93eb29a5,6F142E71AEF1,"So in conclusion, I have shared many reasons why the electoral colledge needs to go. I hope that you mull over these ideas and that you bring them to the governments attention. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+48d4698f3680,6F5B58C28A2D,"A world full of driverless cars seems a thousand years away; the thought of being able go anywhere at anytime without driving or a driver seems to be science fiction. However, with recent advancements in the field of driverless automoblies, this fantasy can exist sooner than one might think. With the Google Car program and BMW's ""Traffic Jam Assistant,"" the world of driverless cars may almost be here. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+04b1641c5582,6F5B58C28A2D,"I believe that development and research for the creation of truly automatic transportation should be continued, based on information from ""Driverless Cars Are Coming: ",Position,Effective,,,
+f693f9afadb4,6F5B58C28A2D,"the invention of driverless cars, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+772b94dd34c4,6F5B58C28A2D,"the safety implications and solutions, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b95b69ded892,6F5B58C28A2D,the options for making driving a better experience. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b162d193696b,6F5B58C28A2D,"Completely driverless cars continue to be science fiction, but with advancements in technology, the dream of driverless cars is within reach. But the obstacles of driverless cars are not as simple as just inventing one. Right now, driverless cars exist, such as Google's modified Toyota Prius. With a multitude of different sensors, including a rotating radar on the roof, this car can mimic the skill of a human. These developments have revolutionized the field of driverless cars; with the Google Car project, it is possible to have a driverless car today. But there is still room for improvement, such as safety and the driving experience, which is why development of these driverless cars should continue. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e72144f08c23,6F5B58C28A2D,"The issue of the safety of automoblies is still relevant to driverless cars as well. If there is a situation that the driverless car cannot handle, there could be accidents and damage. However, driverless car developers continue to address this problem, and solutions have been proposed. BMW has announced that they have developed a car that can drive itself for speed up to 25 mph. They also require that the driver keep attention to the wheel, and will notify if there is a situation where the driver must take over. This allows the driver to navigate work zones or around accidents, increasing the safety of the driverless car. The car can alert the driver in several ways, so the driver can always know when it is necessary to drive. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cda6f1b62315,6F5B58C28A2D,"With more development, the cars can be better prepared to handle situations and know when to notify the driver, increasing the safety of the experience. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+1fd584a34b96,6F5B58C28A2D,"With the invention of the driverless car, the driving experience can change in new ways. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+207115fe67c4,6F5B58C28A2D,"The aspect of driving a driverless car allows the driving fun to be interpreted in diferent ways. This especcially proves true for in-car entertainment options. With cars that can notifty the driver whenever there is a situation to take over, the driver can relax and use in-car entertainment and information systems safely. These increase the driving experience and what the driver or passangers can do, without endangering people or property. As more development is made, the driving experience can change to make driving better for all; a time to relax or have fun, while maintaining safety. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+962326c3879c,6F5B58C28A2D,"With so many advancements in driverless cars, a world run by driverless cars is a possibility. The invention of driverless cars, safety solotions, and an increase in the driving experience all show that with development and research, truly driverless cars can be achieved. I believe that development on driverless cars should continue, so that they can be perfected and put into use, making driving better for everyone. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cc173659889a,6F7CCB64354C,"I've heard that you were changing the school policy , and that you wanted to hear from the students. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fc6faab02b8e,6F7CCB64354C,I've heard about the changes you want to make and I have a lot of suggestion on it ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e660d31ee573,6F7CCB64354C,after school programs is the only way some of the students stay out of trouble ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8420d5465950,6F7CCB64354C,"So then with you taking that away from them, they will have nothing else to do . Then they will turn to the streets, and i know you wouldn't want that for our fellow students . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78cbf4e08f5a,6F7CCB64354C,may be them getting a C grade average is the best they can do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9387b5192086,6F7CCB64354C,"Then our school wouldn't have the best after school activities we could have. Then the people who enjoy it the most , but doesn't meet the standard wouldn't have the ability to get a scholar ship in it even if they need it the most. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+097054a2c4ef,6F7CCB64354C,without after school activities students wouldn't really be able to work out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f10fa8802bf,6F7CCB64354C,"Then we would have even more students turning obesity. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77e9b3ebce49,6F868B506EB5,it is good that all student should perform in community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3f3858bc0568,6F868B506EB5,because with out community service you with not go to high school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9033cf705f36,6F868B506EB5,"some of them think that community service takes a lot of time but that make us to help, people ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4121bf700f08,6F868B506EB5,for example if you do a community service for 20 hours in elementary school that the only think that is going to make you pass to high school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19dc5957d8af,6F868B506EB5,When i was in Africa we do community every Friday because we need to improve in our physical fitness and do some work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fdcce5049c4,6F868B506EB5,"not every day in class learn some time we have go out side the school and do some for when is snow is good for us as student to help the teacher clean the snow, so TEACHER_NAME are in support with the community student take or they get lazy in doing thing for example in south Africa the city usually ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4fd459f6a52d,6F896BABB13C,The electoral college should be abolished ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ab16010769a1,6F896BABB13C,because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates elector ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b8a4e4c942e,6F896BABB13C,and the voters cant always control who their electors vote for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+76af51544c15,6F896BABB13C,On the other hand the electoral college is a great thing because a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possibe but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+56d15b4965a2,6F896BABB13C,When you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates elector ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24f8dbb5f5dd,6F896BABB13C,"Most people, including me, would like to vote for the president not a candidate because they might not even vote for the person you want for president. Some states are smaller then others so that makes them feel like their votes arent as important as the bigger states like California and Texas. The electoral college consists of only 538 electors compared to how many people are actually in the U.S. so there is a greater chance that the wrong president might be elected. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6e60e5a5bd4,6F896BABB13C,Many people do not vote because the voters cant always control who their electors vote for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed36da5659e6,6F896BABB13C,"Not everyone wants to take the chance of voting for the wrong person to be elected for president. Some voters might get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate, as it says in source 2. Most states are small so most people in those states dont think the little states matter and they arent important in the election when they actually do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e1b0be69df3,6F896BABB13C,On the other hand the electoral college is a great thing because a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possibe but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8e5b0d8cb97d,6F896BABB13C,"A better thing about the electoral college is that it requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal, meaning that not all the vote can come from one or two regions and no other ones. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7f32a29219d9,6F896BABB13C,Voters in presidential elections are the people who want to express a political preference rather than the people woh tihnk a single vote can dicide an election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+047f14232e17,6F896BABB13C,"As a student I want the best for the up coming generations, including me, that are going to be able to be a part of the presidential elections and to not be confused who to vote for or how the electoral college works. Every year a new generation becomes legal to vote and be part of the election but if they dont know how to vote or how it works then they wont be able to. Some people dont know anything about poitics but, still want to be able to vote so, it should be easy for them to vote for who they want to be president rather then the long process of, voting for the canidates elector and most of the time they dont vote for who they want and they vote for the wrong person.         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+612f7e6b847b,6FA5454B11D4,I do think that students should be required to do community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+c6ba627e9a8b,6FA5454B11D4,Students should take care of their community by keeping it clean. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+17bc0394172a,6FA5454B11D4,Performing community service can help student get jobs in the future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+66115f449b2e,6FA5454B11D4,"The final reason is that it'll just make them feel good about themselves knowing they've helped out their community. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c1a6467ea20f,6FA5454B11D4,When i say keeping the community clean i mean clean all the litter and trash that some people carelessly throw on the street. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a489295911fc,6FA5454B11D4,Every weekend or so get together with your group and head out into the streets and pick up what ever lose trash you find and dispose of it the right way. I think this is the most important reason that students should do community service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dce4180d1874,6FA5454B11D4,Say you write down that you've worked in a soup kitchen or at a local retirement home it will more likely get you a better career. It might take some time out of your day but even when your helping those in need at the end of the day you really just helped yourself. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7c7ade1e8f02,6FA5454B11D4,"If you help a mentally disabled or physically disabled person that is less fortunate than you understand that you have more than you can ask for while some others don't even have a home, a good brain, or even body parts. If you help the needy and you say to your parents this is nice helping others they'll look at you as a more mature adult knowing that now you know not to take anything for granted and enjoy all the little things. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3e16a12a93df,6FA5454B11D4,These are just a few of the many reasons that students should be required to perform community service for the school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+75025bb83156,6FB4BDEE27AE,Cars that drive them selves shouldn't be developed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+614ac3f346ad,6FB4BDEE27AE,These cars shouldn't be developed because the cars they have now aren't completely driverless ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02921c91ece5,6FB4BDEE27AE,"All the ""driverless"" cars now can't navigate through any work zones or car accidents. Only thing these cars can do is steer, accelerate, and brake by themselves. What good are they if they can't manuever through things by themselves? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3ee6a5f86f36,6FB4BDEE27AE,If someone was texting and driving in their driverless car and they let their car take over and their driverless car failed to drive by itself and a accident occured who would be to blame? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9e0009e6789f,6FB4BDEE27AE,Would the driver or the creators of the car be at blame for the accident? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55551abd53e3,6FB4BDEE27AE,"Fully driverless cars shouldn't be developed. The automatic steering, acceleration, and braking by themselves are okay for a car. But completely driverless? No us drivers can stick to driving cars manually. Not wanting to drive is pure laziness anyways. People should enjoy being able to drive. There's no reason to not enjoy driving. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7be37c99ac31,6FB60C290F5A,Should we have electoral collage or not? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cca29bada2ca,6FB60C290F5A,We should have electoral collage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ca29873aed7c,6FB60C290F5A,it is easier to elect a president then having to go through a process of sending in votes by hand ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b037b818ab2,6FB60C290F5A,It is better to send votes by computer because all you have to do is click a button and the the vote is sent to the elector. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+41821ed63b0f,6FB60C290F5A,"Under the 23rd admendment of the constitution 3 elctors were allocated in the district of columbia. The electors are to be treated like a state for a purpose. As stated in (what is the electoral collage)'' the word state also refers to the district of columbia. Therefore the electoral collage selectes each candidate runnig for president. Also each state has its own personal group of electors. The political party is candidates who chose the electors.
+
+The electoral collage starts every for years to selecte a new president. Every first tuesday in november people help choose state electors when voting for the new president. People sometimes dont get that you are not actually voting for the president you are voting for the candidates electors.
+
+Once the president is elected the govenor prepares a ''certificate of ascertainment. Once that happens the listing of all the candidates who ran for president in a state and their names respective electors.                            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5c401b8e88b,6FC359E7AFD1,"Hello, my name is STUDENT_NAME
+
+and I wanted to talk to you about the cell phone policy with you. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f23e606960bd,6FC359E7AFD1,My opinion on the policy is to not have cell phones out at all. I have a couple of ways to back up my opinion. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f8f1d94c5a35,6FC359E7AFD1,"First off, I think cell phones are a really big distraction during school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+09c8df22e1e2,6FC359E7AFD1,When the teacher is teaching a lesson teachers do NOT want the kids to be side tracked so they don't learn. That would be a huge problem. They would do very poorly on tests and would have bad report cards (which grades are very important to me). ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5a4f587314c,6FC359E7AFD1,"Also, if the kids have their cell phones out during free time or lunch break they could be sending out some things such as showy pictures of themselves and sending the pictures to different people in other schools or people around the school. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e337c163a3a1,6FC359E7AFD1,"They could also be bullying someone that doesn't fit in as well as other people or are just different. And that wouldn't be good for the kids or the teachers. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aad3c8c955c4,6FC359E7AFD1,"You and I know that kids will still try to text during class, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2850230a77cd,6FC359E7AFD1,but it is worth a shot. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+102e7be31e75,6FC359E7AFD1,That is my opinion on how I would not like to have cell phones out during school and thank you. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3e655fa56516,6FCD57CA5E41,"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The electoral college process consist of the selection of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors wher they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ae6c52a4b6fd,6FCD57CA5E41,Personally I believe that Electoral Colleges work ,Position,Adequate,,,
+65d5b1ec0df2,6FCD57CA5E41,"because it would be a great process where students can work their way up to become a congressman, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cd9143448381,6FCD57CA5E41,it would also look good on your reputation. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c2490b9863d6,6FCD57CA5E41,It would be a great process where students can work their way up to become a congressman. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+29209bb3078e,6FCD57CA5E41,"Imagine all the wonderful things you can learn about congress and you can have your own personal experience. The electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is requried to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in the Congressional delegation: one for each memeber in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for aslate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you live in Taxas, fpr instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democatic electors pludges to Mr. Kerry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f91d78b319d,6FCD57CA5E41,It would look good on your reputation. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1e03db468584,6FCD57CA5E41,"Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. I know your would wat that because that would be great, and really helpful. The presidential election is held every four yoears on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. You help choose your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. After the presidential  election, your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. Your state's Certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the official recors of the presidential election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1796dbabd674,6FCD57CA5E41,The single best argument against the electoral college is what researchers call the disaster factor. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c9db0bfa885f,6FCD57CA5E41,"The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The system allows for much worse. Consider that the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9ba02dca2df4,6FF3C3A95428,Dear principal i think that you should be able to bring your cell phones to school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3e7679c95784,6FF3C3A95428,because if your mom or dad is trying to contact you because of a family emergency and your phone is off than they might get worried and panic. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b5df8c4dbb1,6FF3C3A95428,And if the students have there phone out during lunch than it's ok but if they have it out during class than the teacher can take it away and send it to the principals office. And the principal can take care of it and call the parents and tell them that your kid was using his/her phone during class so we had to take it away from him. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58666ab34892,6FF3C3A95428,When it's lunch or break time than they could call their parents or whoever their parent is and ask what's going on and if it's nothing serious than they don't have to worry anymore. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffc497ed3d5b,6FF3C3A95428,But if it's serious than they could go to the office and ask them if they could leave but it wouldn't be ok with the office because your parent has to be at the school to sign you out for example yesterday my mom came to school to pick me up early for an emergency so she had to go in the office to tell them that i am here to pick up my kid.      ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+32be1ecd39ef,6FFD7E6D4DF1,I think the face is a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7abcb3bce0f3,6FFD7E6D4DF1,"The article states that Scientsists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, but only this one had an unusual shadow that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. The scientsts flew to Cydonia for the first to take pictures of the original Viking photos. Thousands were waiting for the image first appeared on a JPL web site. The web site had revealed that the face was not an alien, but it was an natural landform.
+
+Michael Malin and his Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times haper than the original photo. Face was located at 41 degree north matian latitude where it was winter in april, 1998. The camera showed the image and there was no alien monument after all. The picture actually shows the Marian equivalent of a butte landform common around the American West. The scientists tried it again and they just don't pass over the Face very often. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bed2899d199c,6FFD7E6D4DF1,The face is an natural landform like the article said  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+710fe4cf2a80,708AB9D67FAC,The Electoral College should be kept. It has been like this for a lot of years so why change it now? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a846e1e3bcc6,708AB9D67FAC,"It is not a complicated system that people don't understand and works well with our country. Electoral College should stay, many would argue it is not a democratic modern sense but this country is a democracy so of course the system of which we pick our president has to be democratic. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+27fda4c5d7d3,708AB9D67FAC,The Electoral College should stay because to win it a candiate would have to be popular in states other than the South ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28eab7d6eeb8,708AB9D67FAC,"It is understading citizens in the South might feel like their vote does not count, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b78236f74111,708AB9D67FAC,but at the end of the day if that was the way it has been done for several years and there is no reason to change it now ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9dab31fd5bc0,708AB9D67FAC,"""Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign"" (Source 3, Paragraph 20). If people are starting to pay more attention to the campaign and what is happening around the country then that is a good thing to keep the Electoral College. People start to care about who governs and who tries to make this country better. They all go out and vote for who they think it is best, even if the person that they wanted to win, didnt. This system makes citizens feel like their voices matter and it can make a difference. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53d200a06ad2,708AB9D67FAC,"""The Electoral College avoids the problem of the elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the cast"" (Source 3, Paragraph 22). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1311f3f855dd,708AB9D67FAC,The Electoral College is avoiding another problem so it should be kept. It is avoiding a problem such as a person getting too many votes and keeps it fair for both candiates. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cacb6b72cfd,708AB9D67FAC,"It is important to keep it because voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election (Sourse 3, Paragraph 23). The people that think their political ideas are more imporant than votes, should the person to govern a country. They think about the good things and if their ideas are good enough, they should win. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c707a92b86b,708AB9D67FAC,"In conclusion, the Electoral College should be kept the same. It has been the same for years so no reason to change it now. It has more benefits such as, citizens paying more attention to the electoral campaigns, and good candiates who cares more about thier political belifes then votes.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ab923c2baeaf,709156BCF733,I think students must have a least a B average to participate in sports. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+350a264be3a0,709156BCF733,That way the students can bring their grades up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba30d6ed845f,709156BCF733,A lot of students would want to bring their grades up because they would like to participate in sports. That's a way students can bring up their grades. Maybe the students can bring their grade up and that way the students can work harder in class. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab9b719d0f45,709156BCF733,That way students can work hard and participate in a sport that they deserve for getting good grades. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+514a4f9f7942,709156BCF733,This policy may work so students can bring their grade up and stop failing their classes. One way they can bring up their up and be able to participate in sports is by turning in there homework and completing their work in class. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+503734ebff20,709156BCF733,"Here at SCHOOL_NAME we have a policy that says "" If you have more than three (F)'s you cant participate in a sport"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+295c915b32b2,709156BCF733,"That's why a lot of students try to get a good grade, and that's why the students turn in all their work, in order to participate in a sport. Their is a lot of students in SCHOOL_NAME that don't have good grades and cant participate i ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e6570bd20670,70B6F3CF220A,Do you think that the Electoral College prosses is practical? Do you think that it is okay for someone else to vote for us? ,Lead,Effective,,,
+0d28f2381f6f,70B6F3CF220A,"Well, I dont think that it is right, and there are some reasons I am about to tell you that may change your mind about the whole process of voteing and electing a president. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5ddf41932203,70B6F3CF220A,Here are a few points I am going to cover in this essay about Electoral Colleges: over sixty percent of people do not agree with the electoral process ,Claim,Effective,,,
+66821a13f07c,70B6F3CF220A,it it outdated and not accurate ,Claim,Effective,,,
+88a7cb6f1ad0,70B6F3CF220A,the electorers have proven to be untrustworthy in the past. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+359e67ae4813,70B6F3CF220A,"Most people dont really understand what the Electoral College is, or what it is about, so let me just inform you about it a little. The Electoral College is a process that was established in the constitution and it is a strategy that we use to elect out presidents. The citizens vote for the president, but so the the electors in the Electoral College. There are over five hundred members of the Electoral College, and if a canadate wants to win presidency, he/she has to gain 270 of the Electoral College's votes. Each person running has a set of their own electors ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c9920d3bcadc,70B6F3CF220A,"Many people believe that this should not be used as a way to elect a president because in the past, the Electoral Collage made Gore loose the presidental election because although he had more popular votes than Goerge Bush, he has less electoral votes. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+606147904bca,70B6F3CF220A,"Some people argue that the Electoral College is trustworthy, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8ca3673a55ca,70B6F3CF220A,but how are my fellow Americans expected to trust a group of people who have betrayed us before? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+685452b4e622,70B6F3CF220A,Another reason why I dont think that we should keep the Electoral College is because so many people disagree with it ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c26af8e0c03d,70B6F3CF220A,"Everyone has their own reason for not liking it, but sixty percent of American voters agree that we should not have it and we need to find a new system for electing presidents. Most people lost repect for the Electoral College after what happened with Bush and Gore, but many people think that it is old and outdated, and that it doesn't really make any snese to use it and that it is irrational. I'm not saying that just because a lot of people don't like something, that we should change it, I'm just explaining that if only fourty percent of the nation agrees with something, then maybe the majority should win! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0bf44800492f,70B6F3CF220A,"Some people might say that the Electoral College was put in the consitution and that we should keep using the process because we've had it for so long, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a7849caecc1e,70B6F3CF220A,"but with time, things change, and just because we've used something for a long time, doesn't mean we shouldn't upgrade. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+00314844ae04,70B6F3CF220A,"Don't you think that it is great to live in a free county where the citizens make the rules, and what is in the best interest of the people is what is taken into consideration more than what the government wants? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a178fa6db609,70B6F3CF220A,"Well, the Electoral College isn't what ""we the people"" want. We want to be able to choose who we elect, not another group of people ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1d9ad1d1fa2,70B6F3CF220A,"Some may argue that the electoral congress is good because if two canadates get the same amount of popular votes, the Electoral Congress acts as a tie breaker ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cad7f57232f3,70B6F3CF220A,but I'm sure that we can find a better way to break the tie than having untrustworthy people decide the fate of our homeland. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0257afcb0829,70B6F3CF220A,"This is why I think that we should get rid of the Electoral Congress, too many people disagree with it, there are many flaws in the system and it is old and outdated. I hope that I have swayed your opinion and that you are part of the sixty percent of Americans who are hungry for change.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+92964da272c4,70E008E55102,The 1900's  was much different then it is now. For example new technology and new discoveries.  What else has changed is wether to keep the electoral college or not.  The Electoral College is a big part in our government and plays a big part in wether who will be our next president. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6dcf91e414aa,70E008E55102,"According to the passage""What is the Electoral College"" by the Office of the Federal Register, the Electoral college is a process, not a place. This means that it is not in a certain place it is all over the United States.  The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualififed citizens.  The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+545037e61cd6,70E008E55102,I feel that we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43b7dac721cb,70E008E55102,because it will help us with the voting process.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af341ab8db2b,70E008E55102,"According to the passage"" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer he states that under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president.  As a result I feel that this isnt much of an issue for us citizens because if you make the right choice then they will vote for your president.  So if you think about it there really isnt much of an issue because your president will still have your vote. The Electoral College is widely regarded as a non-democartic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69b9119bcc99,70E008E55102,"Proceeding further, the Electoral College is based of the electors you pick and then they decide of who becomes president by the popular vote.  When you are voting for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors.  Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ca7c095c1c39,70E008E55102,"In conclusion, the electoral college is about voting for electors and then they become president if enough popular votes are met.  Some people like this  method and then some of the people dont.  We all have our opinion by mine is i like this method. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0d21fb93763e,710819DE9003,"I believe this decision can be looked at in more ways than one.
+
+Sometimes school doesn't always mean having students learn in a classroom setting, rather by being, setting, or finding examples. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fba8d87d4efa,710819DE9003,I think it should be a requirement to all students to take up some type of community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8a593ac1003b,710819DE9003,Such cooperation can educate students on subjects like character building or leadership. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e414b2967d4f,710819DE9003,It would give pupils a chance to interact with others and create a foundation that could prove to be helpful to them as a reference in future situations such as going to college or finding a job. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+63e37c5a6bd2,710819DE9003,"Besides this, most of the average teenage or high school students do not understand the possibility of there being something in the community or something in the world that is bigger than themselves. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+80776032eb2d,710819DE9003,Most students would rather stay at home and watch TV or play video games. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23b11e8d36cb,710819DE9003,"While this is all right by all means, students should want to get out and begin making a difference ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d01cdce2dee1,710819DE9003,Community service can only help to allow them to see the bigger picture. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+05a8e3cfe969,710819DE9003,"As someone already participating in high school sports and tutoring my peers, I think it is safe to say from my perspective that little things like this do make a huge difference in who you are as a person and as a studen ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ddd9452cd770,710819DE9003,"It is very important for young adults to want to take part in their community, and to want to build leadership skills. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+52c13e1bbaff,710819DE9003,"Most people my age do not understand that they are part of something greater.
+
+We would rather be out at the latest movie or shopping for the latest fashions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+218d242ccc87,710819DE9003,As it is wonderful for a student to work hard during school hours and have the opportunity to treat themselves to these thing ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9abb8b99d4a1,710819DE9003,"they should also recognize that some people unable to do the same, and need the help. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+561215aedaf5,710819DE9003,"All in all, I think requiring the student body to participate in such activities as community service will only help them.
+
+It will show them a bigger picture while developing leadership skills and building character around their peers. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+50115aab436d,712A59B74C91,"Have you ever thought on keeping the Electoral Vote or change it by popular vote for the president of the United States? I think you have. Well, we know what Electoral Vote is, the founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5cb94594d19d,712A59B74C91,"On my opinion the Electoral Vote should be changed in order for people to vote for the president they want. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+1996e3823da6,712A59B74C91,"To begin with, the Electoral vote has a job to do. For example,if someone wants to run for president and the electoral vote has no voice in the selection there is a probability that the person doesn't get a change to talk to the people. As stated on
+
+(Source 3)
+
+""..... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc79161d70ba,712A59B74C91,This means that we the people have no right on electing the president. Every vote for a president it first goes through the Electoral Vote hands and then they decide whether or not to set him as a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e7c1cf48b32,712A59B74C91,"Moreover, the Electoral Vote is like the king of a country, it decides the president and its votes. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+48ea3987e886,712A59B74C91,"In the Constitution there is an amendment that says evryone is equal . however in this except from
+
+(Source 3)
+
+says otherwise, "" So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaing than small states does..."" The founding father were part of the Constitution but also part of the Electoral Vote, which have been taken that amendment way too far. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5c4003e0ce06,712A59B74C91,"In conclusion, the Electoral Vote is been taking evrything to their power. They should be removed from electing presidents. They are going to be ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+29b9581e38c0,71466A710ABD,"YOU HAVE A POINT HERE
+
+to not allow students to use cell phone on school grounds ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+66075277aec9,71466A710ABD,i think we should be allow to ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b73ee80c3f4b,71466A710ABD,"what if your sick and no one around to see u or nothing and you pass out. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+15fbc1148af9,71466A710ABD,"BUT
+
+some people will text in class and u guys wont know ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+505bd195ab3b,71466A710ABD,so i thing there should be cameras in all classroom. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c738866ef529,71466A710ABD,i choose policy one is because we understand the rules here and cell phone would be okay to texting on lunch periods only not in class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d7d4e207d90b,71466A710ABD,it will make the teacher mad and yell at you if your phone on in class u can turn your phone on but turn the ringer off when your in class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20c27154019a,71466A710ABD,policy 2 i don't under stand why u guys don't allow in on school grounds when you know people will still do it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b4a62c5d991,71466A710ABD,"they would be talking dirty on the phone so u need more people watching around the school.
+
+we need 3 secrity guard watching the school too not only one. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+281cdbd9ee03,718800CC3C50,The senator should keep the Electoral Collage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c89f0cfb54a3,718800CC3C50,"it keeps balance, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3dd483c83c4c,718800CC3C50,order ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+01c781e9dcc8,718800CC3C50,actrecy. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f56130bff6c4,718800CC3C50,It keeps balance ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cd8667568c8,718800CC3C50,"because if the public were to vote on who is the new president of the Untied States some people might fight and argure over who's the new president, why he should be their, and a lot of other reasons. The population might think he will be a great guy and a good president, and that everything will turn out ok. Then when they are elected it turns out he might not be such a great president after all, he's probably going to make all the wrong decides and choices for this nation after a becomes president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f0277f5c75f,718800CC3C50,"In the Electoral Collage they look at how many votes both of the candidates get, they also look at what the candidates have in mind for our country and all of the other plans they have enstore for it. Of course the public will have to vote on which candidate they want for this nation to serve as our president. After looking at the candidates background, what their going to do, then they will make a discision who becomes president of the Untied States. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+976f3d089d71,718800CC3C50,The Electoral Collage is a good thing to have around because without it the whole voting process will be out of order. Thanks to the Electoral Collage things will stay in order and in place. And in the end we can find and get the best president for this nation.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b4a62169ec97,71AF8059184A,I think we should get rid of the Electoral Collage vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+23b01ba260b3,71AF8059184A,It's not fair that a majority of people get to vote extra. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5362d84f6fb0,71AF8059184A,"The candidate's get to choose people who will vote for the person who picked them just bc they picked them. They probbaly dont have good reasons on the they pick that candidate they just pick him/her because they picked that person. They candidate who did win the election their electorial voters get a przie just for helping them win the election. And the others well they get nothing. It's not fair to the other people who voted for their apponite. All they get is a ""Thanks for voting"". Presidents voters get a cerification for helping them when. It's not fair to everyone else ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+464de1223f33,71AF8059184A,Sometimes they candidate they picked to win isn't even a good presidant. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2cc369151090,71AF8059184A,They can't hold up to their side of the deal. the President says he/she will fix our economy and then the economy drops. They say they will prvovied a better education for students and they don't. Two electors from the same state can go to Congress. The candidates pick people from the states who know that the will vote for that specific candidates. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f58f23aac8c2,71AF8059184A,"n 2000 campaign, in total, seventeen sates didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b9d174bc01f1,71AF8059184A,In 25 of the largest media market a majority of voters did not go see any of the campaign ads. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d90a686ad657,71AF8059184A,Candidates will bribe voters and Electorial Collage voters just to vote for that candidate and not they other. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9e0292c9c78f,71AF8059184A,It's not fair to the other candidte who plays by the book for losing to someone who goes around the book to get more votes just to be President. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+390c7c8c2d5c,71AF8059184A,Again I think we should get rid of the Elctorial Collage vote.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1ea3bc12e194,71C6704EA7FD,"Everyone, whether old, young, tall, or short, have an opinion. In America, we have many amendments protecting us so we can share our opinions with whomever we want. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+63cfcde7ead4,71C6704EA7FD,"However, the electoral college is flat out taking away our right to share our thoughts about the future leaders of the nation. The electoral college is irrational, and unfair. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+c4d85d1b05ef,71C6704EA7FD,The most basic reason why the electoral college is unfair to our country is because not everyone is fairly represented. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d5364fa506d7,71C6704EA7FD,"For example, there are 55 representatives in California to represent 35 million voters. As you can see, it is an unfair ratio. It is impossible for the House's votes to reflect the views of the people in California. That also means that since each state only has one fianl vote, a state such as Wyoming, who has 500,000 voters, would have as much say as California, with 35 million. California has more people, and my making every state have equal representation, it is messing up representation in states like California. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e099de71f9b0,71C6704EA7FD,"In the system we have today, it is very easy to have a dealocked election. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+97194a2d6f36,71C6704EA7FD,"In 1968, a mere 41,971 votes would have caused a major deadlock in the election. The same thing happened again in 1976, if 5,559 votes in Ohio and 3,687 votes in Hawaii decided to vote differently. In both cases, and few thousand votes could have caused a serious disaster. History tends to repeat itself, so if the almost exact situation happened in the span of less than ten years, what makes you think it won't happen again? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1b7cbca07831,71C6704EA7FD,The electoral college creates an unfair system to gaining votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e3d48990310,71C6704EA7FD,"In 2000, 17 states, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, who are home to some of the largest media markets, didn't even get the chance to see a campaign ad. If you were a canidate, wouldn't you want your ad to be seen in the some of the largest media markets? The canidates had already thought they won those states, which is a ignorant move to make. Because of the electoral college, and the unspoken rules that have been set in place about certain states views, the canidates missed a greatly helpful opprotunity to gain more votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca024dabcd58,71C6704EA7FD,"However, many might think that the electoral college is a good system because it gives a clear winner, and it makes the states have equal representation. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+11b38937a990,71C6704EA7FD,"If the people are barely being represented, and a state with less than a million voters has as much say as a state with 35 million voters, then it doesn't matter if the process gives a clear winner. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+df21a0b694fc,71C6704EA7FD,"The people want to have a say, not someone choosing for them. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f3bc120b96e7,71C6704EA7FD,"The electoal college may have been a good idea back when it was first created, however, times are changing and the number of people being able to vote is growing day by day. The voters want to give their opinion through voting, and by having the electoral college in place, it is making voting unfair, irrational, and nearly impossible to do ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a0fcdce3577d,71E850FCDA63,it is not an alien created object ,Position,Adequate,,,
+41f972e0077a,71E850FCDA63,"""The first reason i have to support why this is not alien made because after a NASA Surveyor revealed that the images were a naturaly formed stucture and that there was no alien monument ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d97871321823,71E850FCDA63,This is a big give away if it was aliens we would be able to tell ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a50770bf52f4,71E850FCDA63,The second reason I have to share is that it is an illusion ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1679a7bd9e86,71E850FCDA63,aliens probably wanted it to be like that ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+545820ac3071,71E850FCDA63,No because Mars has many natural disasters such as eruptions and Mars quakes ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5cb951cfc666,71E850FCDA63,If aleins really did make that don't you think they would keep track of it the stucture ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5b6e6d58e80f,71E850FCDA63,"Look at these photos,you see it has parished?"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fdc13f9710c,71E850FCDA63,now we can all look at that face and know it is not aliens ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+58bb24c3ff9e,720030D83705,I think that having electorals college is a great idea for our counries ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89eec74b933e,720030D83705,"because they also help the voters with thier votes also because all the other people have candidate which makess it easy for electors who democrafts in texas because they know this will not have any effect in them otherwise they wouldnt vote but the electors need good reasons why the voters should vote for them so you would need to have specific facts and good source and why would you make a great president or why you think your better than the other elector all this questions and more you have to persuade them in any possible way but with truth no lies like if you promise the world for better oppportunities you have to prove to them youre actually willing to do this and be part of thier lives by changing the way they live not only that but you have to accomplish your goals . At the end whoever has more votes is the winner the people who voted for you are especting the best out of you bascally thier putting all thier trust in you, someone they have no clue who you are and why are the exact reason your thier or what your goals are,    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c17c0190a8f4,7203112033A1,"Hello my name is Generic_Name and I am here to tell you why I think, distance learning is a good idea, rather then a bad idea ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b37a87b8be74,7203112033A1,"My first opinion on distance learning would be, maybe he or she gets bullied for the classes they take and dont want to be in school no more. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+21044c8a57b7,7203112033A1,"My second opinion would be if your not in school range and your parents can't drive you to school on time, then you could easily stay home, pull out your phone, computer, or tablet and do you work on it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1044920853a2,7203112033A1,My third opinion would be why not try it you know maybe you'll like it. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+811c4fc4b44e,7203112033A1,"1 OPINION: Everyone one knows school is very hard for everyone, nowadays school is based off of how you dress, or the way you walk, or just in general who you are. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f11c1bc18c1a,7203112033A1,"I used to get bullied in school a lot but ever since I switched to online school I've never felt better I get all my work done, the teachers are so nice to me, there very patient and polite, and I dont have to put up with nobody's crap from school. It was a good switch for me, and it'll be a good switch for you too! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+988d841d600b,7203112033A1,"2 OPINION: Every where you live there is always one problem, school range. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db72a762be1d,7203112033A1,"I know its hard for everyone to find a ride to school or maybe it isn't, but say one day you move and u can't find a ride to school the next week and you dont have a ride cause your parents can't take you cause they're running late for work, or you just missed the bus and your house is to far from the school. Well that's why you've been given the option for online school. Would you take it ? I would because iw ouldn't have to stress on trying to get up on time, and trying on clothes for school, or finding something to eat all in a rush. I love online school cause i can get up at whatever time i want to. I wouldn't ave to make my parents late for work every now and then. Also you can start your assignments on your time, say like your not busy u can start it then but you have to do them because there are new assignments everyday. So think about it for a minute and see why it might be a good option for you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dacfd26ddd26,7203112033A1,"3 OPINION: Why not just try it. I think you guys or girls, or whatever should give it a try because not everyone has the privilege to have sort of secondary learning challenge ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5e80812f926,7203112033A1,"I think that if your try it just like I did. The price for online school is around from 150-200 dollars, I know it might sound a little exspensive but its worth every penny you spend. So dont hesitate to try it you'll love it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42fa09c0dded,7203112033A1,"In conclusion I think it is a good thing to do distance school because it gives you benefits you've never gotten before and it might turn out to be the best decision you ever made in your son, or daughter life. So dont hesitate to call, call right now if you can I love it and they will to. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+452446b4be77,7219B95E033D,"I would keep the Electoral College because it consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and Vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+959b5c068b64,7219B95E033D,If people want to change the election for popular votes  is basically your generallly chosen by the candidates politcal party...and what their responsibilities are ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+4f05900f3ac1,7219B95E033D,My response to that not everybody is chosen by politcal party. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+cecde010c5ac,7219B95E033D,"Now, if people want to change the election by popular voting is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. You help choose your states electors when you vote for presidents because when you vote for your candidates you are actually voting for your candidates electors. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+640dca7b7d6f,7219B95E033D,"My response to that is..sometimes presidents want to be president because ""they want to change everything in the United States like ..taxes..and health insurance. For example like Obama care he has change the health insurance and people dont like that. And 2016 theres going to be a new President in the United States.    ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b921d360ae01,722E19E62C10,"Hello, my name is Hannah. I am a scientist at NASA who has been studying the ""face"" on Mars over the years. Today my close friend Mason had asked me about any imformation I've found out recently. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d5ed9c7aa374,722E19E62C10,"Well, it just appears to be a natural formation rather than something that was created."" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+654f66e6b915,722E19E62C10,"He argued and argued over how the aliens built it,and how its just been hidden all these years. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6de7f8c1244c,722E19E62C10,the shadows show how they do on Earth on natural formations. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b72fd69e38c,722E19E62C10,I showed him a messa and how they shadow. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+816cefa9990e,722E19E62C10,He still thought the marsians made the formation of the face. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dee29846928e,722E19E62C10,"the ""face"" was only natural. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cafc347ec8ce,722E19E62C10,"I pulled up the pictures taken over the years and let Mason examine them very carefully. The picture taken in 2001 shows that there is nothing else around the face. If there was anyhting on the ground such as an airplane or a shack, you have been able to tell what it was. But there was nothing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc9dfcdaddcc,722E19E62C10,Mason still didn't agree that the form on Mars was a natural landform. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fc950ffddb08,722E19E62C10,"He asked to see the pictures again, along with pictures of a messa and a butte, which are natural landforms here on Earth. Mason looked for hours and hours and hours. He finally spoke up,""Maybe you guys here at NASA are right.. It seems to be completely natural.."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2266a911382,722E19E62C10,"Not only did NASA finally figure out how to ""unmask the face"" and call it a natural landform, but they also provided a lot of information that way people understood it better. To this day the ""face"" is known to be a natural landform! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e1af231494c5,722F0DECA31C,we should keep the electoral college process. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b45362c82ff3,722F0DECA31C,We did it this way every since the founding fathers created it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5335d8bbb6f0,722F0DECA31C,"Most people wouldnt understand that,but this is a process on witch are nation grow up on learning. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69dfb4b24c88,722F0DECA31C,"Also,wouldnt it be diffucult to just change the system out of thin air,think about it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07f15dcf4725,722F0DECA31C,"You also have to think about the people who disagree with changing the system. People can stop voting if they dont like the system. If nobody votes,then are country cant move fourth into the future,and if that happens the USA mint have a civil war. From a diffrent stand point it mint not be a bad thing to get a new system. This is just another reason why we shouldnt change the system of voting. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3b1a87c5cf9a,722F0DECA31C,"The system we have now works,so what will be the point of changing something if it is not broken. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6484cf79707,722F0DECA31C,"The system we have now makes sure not one man has more power than the next man or woman. Think about the improving we have done to the current system,before blacks even couldnt vote into they improved the system. Back then their were alot of errors and stuff wrong with the process into they started improving. Now,why would you want to throw all that hard work away. This is just another why another why we shouldnt get rid of the current voting system. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b35bc288e57,722F0DECA31C,"We even made amedements to help enchance the system,without these amedments the power will be uneven. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ab0de5b9abd,722F0DECA31C,"For instance if they didnt make a amedement to stop slavery then,blacks wouldnt even be able to vote. How bout they didnt make a amendment to give girls the right to vote then the power will still be shifted. You also cant forget how many people fought to make the power equal. If the power is shifted in the tighest a civil war can break out,and ruin what we worked so hard to protect. This was the last reason why we shouldnt chang the system. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8086978fed2b,722F0DECA31C,All in all my letter was about how we shouldnt change the current system we have now. If we do all that hard work will go to waste. We spent so many years perfecting the system. Many people have fought to keep power in check bewteen people. If we made a new system it mint be worse then the system we have. That is why we shouldnt change the system. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e4002a933f0b,7245B7DB7729,Community service can be good for people with spare time but others have no time for something such as this. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ff66038ecc9f,7245B7DB7729,Like if you play sports and have practice from right after school to about 5:30 and then you try to do community service. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+0a90c8081fce,7245B7DB7729,"In my opinion students should not be required to do community service but every few weeks we should have a sign-up sheet for a certain service that people may participate in. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+32acc18df199,7245B7DB7729,"I personally have no time for community service because of all the homework I have and then on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays I help my dad coach my brothers soccer team. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a5c30562893,7245B7DB7729,Maybe in the beginning or end of the year when nothing is going on everyone could do some kind of community service to help out. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70ac05c15f21,7245B7DB7729,Most students whether it be in school or out of school have so much going on or just don't care about doing community service that they stay home and play video games or watch television. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a2a28be387b,7245B7DB7729,"Community service could be as much as making sure that when you roll your car windows down that no trash in your car flies out.
+
+Most kids help the community in little ways like this and don't even now that they are but it makes a big difference. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6cbc06d539b,7245B7DB7729,"Some people love to do community service and every minute they have free they take there time to help somebody.
+
+If you have nothing to do after school then you may need to do some community service so that the community can be clean or tutor some kids, because it can all make a difference in your community.
+
+If I had time on my hands then I would do community service but I do so much already I have no time at all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ae6dac65ba7,7245B7DB7729,On the other hand making kids do community service no matter what could be a good thing. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3eb293c00102,7245B7DB7729,"It would show them that there is much more than just being a kid and trying to get away with stuff. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fb574bc9e952,7245B7DB7729,Like every month the school could pick one service to make a certain grade do and then we could make a huge difference. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2cbf5eb545af,7245B7DB7729,So then again maybe we should do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b999862414f9,7263826C2217,"The electoral college has been around for as long as our nation has reined over this land. I fervently believe we should keep the electoral college as it is. We, as people, are not ready for the responability of choosing our next leader directly viva popular vote. Some of us might be ready for this responability now, but the magority of America cannot handel this responibity. The majority has stared riots over lost football games, acknolaged said riots and justifyed them then turn around and see a riot about a kid being shot 6 times by an officer and send in swat teams and start throwing smoke bombs. Because of these actions and the many like it, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d6e5d0169297,7263826C2217,I whole-heartedly believe if we leave the responability to chose our president in the magority vote that this country will become more unstable than it already it ,Position,Effective,,,
+ab361e496e3f,7263826C2217,most people already do not vote ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3f2cf45185ee,7263826C2217,"some are biast, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5226963a8de7,7263826C2217,some dont follow the consititution when they vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+278b47c614ac,7263826C2217,"To begin with, letting the majority vote on our new president would have potential if the whole of the country voted, but alas only a small essence of the country votes for our future leaders. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+749e46ad80ae,7263826C2217,"Most people are too busy, or lazy, or just dont want to take part in voting becuse of all of the conficting ads placed on television. One of the most atrocious of these ads was the one from mitt romney when he was in the race against President Obama. They put these ads on a chanel designated for familys to veiw, along with children. These ads inculded vivid pictures of aborted fetus, saying this is what would happen if we voted for obama. I've only saw that ad once, but once was more than enough to make me side with Obama more than I already was. If our president is prepared to threten the country like that then they should not be eligable to even run, let alone become President, and it was horendus to think of all of the children watching at the time to have to see that. Most Americans who are eligable to vote have full-time jobs, full-time school, or are busy in some other aspects of life. These people do not have the time to vote for our president becuase they are working at the time, most work one or two jobs at the least, leaving little time for social graces and time alone, let alone time to vote. One other reason citizens dont vote is just hte sheer fact that they are lazy. A good precetage of Americans just do not care about who our president is or who runs for office, thus not voting out of sheer laziness. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b06cb36cb2e,7263826C2217,"Furthermore, letting the majority vote rule who is our president would have potential if the majority of America was not biased in who they vote for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+baa19204248c,7263826C2217,"Almost all Americans have voted baised on their beliefs, or who is running for president. These are the people who voted agaoinst obama becuase of his ethnic background, or what he looked like. This should not go against who we vote for, or who leads us, as long as they are non-biased in what they stand for and have the good of the people in their minds, then they should be eligable, or even voted, as a canidate/president/offical. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aec3209a98a2,7263826C2217,"To continue, letting the majority vote on our new president would have potential if the majority of Americans followed the consititution when voting. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+81a1eb3bf903,7263826C2217,"The majority does not follow the consitiution when voting for our new president, thus inducing an unfair campaine and an biased leader. The consitiution clearly states the Church and State are to be seperated, yet many Americans vote baised on the beliefs of their Church on matters of the State. The latest case of this happening was for the ban on gay marrige. Most voters voted in favor of the ban due a passage in the bible that stated that man shall not lay with another man as he lays with a woman, even though there is a homosexual couple in the bible, mathew/mathius something. The story aout a man named Dave and another named John, if i remember correctly, one of them said ""your love exceeds that of a woman"" or something close to that. There are a number of testiments that say not to judge others or to love everyone, but most focus on the one against those. Baising your vote on spiritual beliefs does not help anyone and is unfair towards those whos lifes you are negativly affecting. We should all think logically when voting for our leaders, and ask questions like 'who will this affect' 'how will this improve apon the lifes of my fellow Americans' 'will this improve our dilapitiating economy and crippling structe of the government' along with other questions that relate to how this canidate will improve apon the country as a whole. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2053cfb7d4c0,7263826C2217,"All in all, I believe that the electoral college should stay in affect untill America, as a whole, grows up, becuase most dont vote, some who vote are biased, and some dont follow the consitiution when voting. We should not have to write papers on why we shouldnt let the people of America vote directly for our leader, nor should we have to have our rights taken away from those who use their religous prectices as an excuse to hate someone. We, the people, should all live together in this country, equaly, as one, not letting our beliefs negativly affect the lives of others. We should be able to practice what we want, when we want, without having to be fearful that others might punish us baised on what they practice. We, the people, need to grow up before we are allowed to vote directly for our new leaders. And that is why i beileve that the electoral college should stay in effect.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1256b66d9f4c,728BCEE2399D,I say that students should not be required to perform community service but make it like a extra credit thing to earn extra credits. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+23c0ee56d855,728BCEE2399D,"Also I think that community service is a good thing for our community and everyone who lives in our community, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+51176ba90b57,728BCEE2399D,"but we should not be required, because a lot of people would probably drop out of school if we were required to do community service. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f0d24a846249,728BCEE2399D,But you could make a volunteer community clean up club for our school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92c7d28294a1,728BCEE2399D,"It can help senior citizens and young children and people with disabilities.
+
+It also could clean up some community parks or playgrounds.
+
+But mostly I would just stick on making a club for volunteers.
+
+That's some of my reasons for not making community service a required activity to pass school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f0dac76c559,728BCEE2399D,Also there are a lot of students already in extra activities ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89f53d5f433b,728BCEE2399D,"like band, or sports or both or even other, so that could be very bad for those students. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc1048b72fff,728BCEE2399D,"But sometimes it's good for them and our community, well its always good for our community. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5d584764fb5e,728DD08A8342,I  belive that my state senator should remove the electoral colleges. To change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e73af8ab0510,728DD08A8342,For the fact that voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors. Who can always defy the will of the people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9241a4291bc0,728DD08A8342,It should also be removed because its simply unfair to the voters. There votes may or may not be counted ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ad9ac9134331,728DD08A8342,may vote for the wrong person or oppsite party. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf5d1fdc2f94,728DD08A8342,Also the problem comes up that the candidates do no go to there state thus never seeing them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d54749c9a497,728DD08A8342,"For the reson that voter are not voteing but for a slate of electors. Who then elect the president, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4835eebda5ce,728DD08A8342,"for example ""if you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry. You'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry.""(qoute form source 2) Those 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry may not win the statewide election. The voters also are not always able to control who there electors vote for. ""Legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people."" (qoute form source 2). So there a chance they may change there mind and the president they wished to win may not win because the legislatures do not have to vote in there favor. In some case seventeen states didn't even see the candidates at all. Some states including Rhode Island and South Carolina, ""and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc7adcc99c9e,728DD08A8342,"For example the winner takes all system in each state. Candidates don't spend times in the states they know they have no chance winning. ""It can be argued that the Electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state."" (qoute from source 3). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+558c1a3c91cb,728DD08A8342,But then what happens to the people in that wants to vote for them but can't because there votes go toward a slate of electors that votes for the other party. They focus on the swing states mostly. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+10fc1f92bace,728DD08A8342,"For Instance a Presidential race that happen were the electoral votes caused a certain party to win was. In 2000 U.S. presidential race, Al Hore received more in dividual votes than George W. Bush nationwide, but Bush won the election, receiving 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+32b130af9402,728DD08A8342,The electoral votes need to be removed because it causes problems in elections which makes any side able to win even though they don't have more individual votes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+74db0d9e0369,728DD08A8342,"Another example is ""Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast on him."" (qoute from sorce 3) .  Study shows that 60% of voters would prefer a direct election rather then what they have now. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+13785eccc26c,728DD08A8342,On the other hand having the electoral votes may not be such a bad thing. The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. The Electoral College also restore some of the weight in the political balance that large states. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+654a36446d68,728DD08A8342,"If you elect a good representive that you belive, and trust that will vote to your liking. Someone that would not turn his back on the will of the people then it would not be that bad. The process they go throught maybe difficult and hard to understand. So it could be a good thing they take the hard work off our backs and do it for us to save us the time and hardwork. The Electoral Colleges requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal rather then a single region appeal. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+78c327327019,728DD08A8342,"To conclude I belive that my state senator should remove the electoral colleges. To change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. For the fact that voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors. Who can always defy the will of the people. It should also be removed because its simply unfair to the voters. There votes may or may not be counted or may vote for the wrong person or oppsite party. The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5c23b6a6e573,72B22E89D0EE,community service is a great way to interact with the community and let them know that the school cares about their community as well. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+105cd4caabf3,72B22E89D0EE,"I know us children tend to be lazy at times, but we should be more active in community service and these are the reasons why. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2d5b92eb3cb2,72B22E89D0EE,One reason students like I and others should be required to perform community service is because right now in this economy its very hard for people to make ends meet for their family and themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+71d7cb5dd369,72B22E89D0EE,"People are becoming homeless, going days without eating, nearly starving, wearing the same clothes everyday and they cant do nothing about it because there are no jobs that they can take. People are being laid-off from their jobs which are leading to those events. If we have community service we will be able to make sure they don't go to bed with their bellies empty, we could make sure that they have a roof over their heads at night, and give them clean clothes to keep. This can really touch peoples hearts and if you were in the same position you would want somebody to do the same thing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3680818c546d,72B22E89D0EE,Another reason students like I and others should be required to perform community service is because we need to clean up our community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+271a95b16a4a,72B22E89D0EE,"Its like now of day people just litter and like nothing happened. In my mind i want to scream out "" do you know you are killing the earth""?. So it would be a good thing to clean up our neighborhood because we live here too, along we the people who litter. People also Vandalize property out on the street that don't belong to them. We should go around cleaning up walls with spray paint remover because nobody wants to walk around and see that. It remind you that you can even have nothing without it getting messed up and at times make u feel unsafe. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ed4eda3e5d38,72B22E89D0EE,People really don't care about community service because they feel like it really doesn't effect them ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+acd422dd2ecb,72B22E89D0EE,"but at the end of the day it does, you line in the same community where you have to live as well, so you might as well take care of it too. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+532990173d58,72B22E89D0EE,It can leave memorable moments in someone slife ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+669a31657a97,72C11495DA32,"I have a idea for the community service for students. I am speaking on behalf of 93 % of the students as well, or close to that percentage. You may not agree with this ideas but all I ask of you is to hear me out and give them a chance. I am we can come to a agreement for the students. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7d12555cda43,72C11495DA32,I think we should have the students only have to do community service two or three times a week ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f7349209d18f,72C11495DA32,For two or three weeks until the next groups does there service. Each group should have five or six students in it and they will do certain things together. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83ea055ce346,72C11495DA32,"Once there weeks are up a next group comes in and this cycle wont repeat until a 2 months later. So I am asking we skip one month of community service. so we go a month skip a month then go a month and skip a month and so on. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b3026592687,72C11495DA32,I know this idea will go well with many students. Plus the service they do will get over before to late so they can get home and do any home work and any of there own things ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8768d60ef5f,72C11495DA32,Please try and give this idea a chance Principal. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9c6d823f4077,72D8B5600A8F,"i don't agree with having a high grade ''B'' to be able to play sports, because many people like playing sports like me and well i don't think its far. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7f78c485c247,72D8B5600A8F,Well yeah it might help them pass there classes but still. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a05be61ad74c,72D8B5600A8F,for some people its really hard and well what's wrong with a ''C'' its still passing. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+88ae935dc645,72D8B5600A8F,I also think that if you want them to have a ''B'' to be passing i don't think you'll have any people playing for your school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+790d423164fd,72D8B5600A8F,I don't know what to tell you i just know that's not a cool thing to us we love playing sports and love joining into clubs but if that's going to be your new rule well that's kinda not cool ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6cb4b7033b22,72D8B5600A8F,. But you know what principal at the same time you have a point because if we really care about our grades and about playing sports i think that's a okay thing to do because it would really help some people and we will be improving a lot well them after sports are over some people might have really grades. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f7638dfa95f1,72D8B5600A8F,"Think about the people that have really hard trouble(like me) and they love playing sports but they just cant play because its really hard for them to keep there grades up, well to a ''B'' ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb63159f662b,72E8EFB1A713,There are many things that could go wrong with the way we the United states are voting now which is why we should use election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c8d9cc1d098d,72E8EFB1A713,"The canidate wouldn't have to worry about losing even though he won the popular vote, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+23c56a73d05e,72E8EFB1A713,it would be less likely to get a tie ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f96ef5fbcf51,72E8EFB1A713,the canidate would have to campain in every state because there wouldn't be a winner-takes-all situation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a963e09e5016,72E8EFB1A713,Most importantly the canidate wouldn't have to worry about losing even though they received the popular vote ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9696911fc6f0,72E8EFB1A713,"The reprsentative electors have the final say in who is elected because they are the ones that put in the votes. An example of this is Al Gore back in 2000. According to some polls Al Gore lost the election thanks to the electoral college because he won the popular vote but still lost the election. Al Gore had recieved more individual votes than George W. Bush but still lost. Geoerge W. Bush had 271 electoral votes to Al Gore's 266. However, this is not the last time this will happen and voters can expect to see it happen again in the future were the popular vote winner loses the presidency. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf43d6f4130d,72E8EFB1A713,"Not only can they win the popular vote but still lose the presidency, they also risk the event of a tie were the vote would then go to the House of Representatives. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1930ee6551ec,72E8EFB1A713,"In the event of a tie meaning that each canidate got an equal number of votes from the electors the House of Representatives would have the oppurtunity to vote for the president. This is not a fair system in any way because that would mean the representative for Wyoming who is only representing 500,000 thousand people would have as much say as a representative from California who is there representing 35 million voters! There has been many close incidents of a tie so it is possible for this to happen. In 1968 a shift of 41,971 votes would have put the election in a tie. In 1976, id 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 in Hawaii would have voted the other way then the race for presidency would have gone into the hands of the House. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cc23472ca666,72E8EFB1A713,Furthermore the canidates would have to campaign in every state because there wouldn't be winner-takes-all which means the winner of the electoral votes gets all the votes within that state even if some of the residents did not vote for that party ,Claim,Effective,,,
+803f9ee30f76,72E8EFB1A713,"The canidates would have to campaign in every state rather than just the ""swing"" states which are people that have not yet decided which way they wanted to vote. the cenidates dont campaign in a state if they know that they have no chance of winning the electoral votes in that state. During the 2000 election a remarkable seventeen states did not see the campaign one time nor did the people in the 25 largest media markets see a campaign ad whether it be on t. v., in the newspaper, or over the radio. If the president was elected by popular vote than every state would be considered a swing state. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5f5ea8ddc713,72E8EFB1A713,"In conclusion the President of the United States should be elected by popular vote because a canidate would not have to worry about winning the popular vote but losing the election, the possibility of a tie would decrease, and the canidate would havw to campaign in every state. These are just a few of the many reasons that we should switch over to a popular vote system, plus who wouldnt wan't to have a little more say in who runs our magnificent country.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5316b31ead7d,72F56A4CC1DE,"I am writing this letter to you today to talk to you about Electoral College and election by popular vote. I feel very strongly on this topic as it is something I  know I  will come in contact with when i have the right to vote in the near future.
+
+As we look back to the very day the Constitution was written, it has been a comprise that between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizen that fifve hundred and thirty eight electorshave a meeting for they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress, as stated by the Office of the Federal Register. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6a96559497e7,72F56A4CC1DE,I strongly feel that we should change from Electoral College to election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e691f1d5352a,72F56A4CC1DE,"The reason I am saying this is because, it allows voters to equally vote for their rightful choice of president in that they feel best about having rule over the country. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cfefacd145c,72F56A4CC1DE,"Why is populary voting a better choice may many ask, popular voting is a better choice because it allows voters to have fair chance of having their choice of President, become Presidnt. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2fd30506dd32,72F56A4CC1DE,"In the eyes of some, one in particular being Richard A. Posner, Electoral College may be good for a few reasons, those reasons being, Certainty of Outcome, Everyone's President, Swing States, Big States, and avoid Run-Off Elections ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a68ac0dffc8b,72F56A4CC1DE,"but, in the eyes of others, it may seem ""Unfair, outdated and irrational."" Says Bradford Plumer. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3aafb8337746,72F56A4CC1DE,"In some cases, Electoral College may be an easier way to go for, the desired President to get elected but, not exactly the fairest way either. I believe that everyone should have a fair chance at voting and waiting for the out come equally with everyone and thats why I believe be we should change to election by popular vote. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b0e47e64a5fa,7301B174090E,I believe that a B average would be a good thing to bring into sports. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+290c98836c11,7301B174090E,it will give them a harder drive to make good grades and do good in school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c7bd40898a80,7301B174090E,"Then again some of the teams best players may not be able to make a B average. this will make teams much small and sports not near as exciting or fun for the spectators who watch these games. very many parents my not be happy about their child not being able to play on a team, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d02340851aa7,7301B174090E,"but school should be more important to these parents who's kids are not achieving a B average. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+520c6d33ed32,7301B174090E,The main reason why i think students should have to have a B average before being able to play sports is that school is the most important thing in someone's life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc8071a06196,7301B174090E,"Even if some kids are not making that B if they love e the sport they play enough they will make that b average no matter what. This will make students strive harder in school but also in sports because they know that they are right on the edge of a C average that will also make the strive harder in whatever sport you may play. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+326c5faa89f4,7301B174090E,On the other hand their will be many mad students and parents because that student is not able to play the sport that he or she may love. and also the coaches may get mad too because one of his or her best plays may not be making the grades that he or she needs to make to play this sport. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+eea48ef130d9,7301B174090E,This would probably only happen for a couple of years or sport seasons but after awhile everything would be back to normal and it would be just like anything else in the world and people would begin to grow to the B average rule that the principle has. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b96252d74666,7301B174090E,I think in the end that this would be a good thing because it would make students want to try harder in school if they really like a sport and wanted to bring their grade up to be able to play this sport. Then again i think every school should have to have this rule because it would be unfair to one team if the other team did not have the players they wanted because of this rule. I think you could take this rule and put it into school systems and see improvement all over the state then maybe all over the country. So yes i think that even though it would cause a lot of trouble it would be a good thing to raise grades all over the country. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+37f0a14d8220,731D759856F0,"I think that yes, our school should participate in community service such as picking up litter and helping out elders and elementary children. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9a967fa9dec8,731D759856F0,I think in this society now a days children and others need to take a little more of responsibility and also it will make a change in our society ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4c48c7729e0,731D759856F0,"Imagine if ,for example us kids and adults helped out elementary children, such as being a tutor, kids would get better grades on the star testing and SAT's. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67371fd35f25,731D759856F0,Another reason would be it would help out with discipline ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d2f17976ecd,731D759856F0,"A lot of children need to understand the meaning of discipline, self control, and respect. If we as kids started helping elementary children with school, not only grades but etiquette and respect, people in general would be nicer and maybe at our schools now a days their wouldn't be as many bullies. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7302343e5f94,731D759856F0,"Also, in the elder department it would also be a big help for children at our scho ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc53a4c0af85,731D759856F0,"The reason being is that it would help us, once again be respectful and understand that in life, you get old, and sometimes gaining age could effect your memory or even, take over how your body works. We could also learn to live life to the fullest and stop caring about who has the new phone or purse exc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31287b29f8fb,731D759856F0,"Lastly, having community service could get us ready to have a stable job and understand the responsibility of it when we have one ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+44b05317d934,731D759856F0,ho wants to get fired on the first day right? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+872d325110c2,731D759856F0,"community service it will help us children with responsibility, respect, and discipline. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bc064b2fa558,732394E7D26E,"Driverless cars are no longer just a facination of the human mind. In todays world, more and more people are funding and creating automomous vehicles. The advancements in technology and human understanding have come together to soon bring us the driverless car. The idea of a car without human assistance is ghostly, yet very interesting. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3137de8b99c4,732394E7D26E,"I believe that human driven cars will soon be a thing of the past, and that the development of these new vehicles will be the new normal. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b7eab60c4859,732394E7D26E,Vehicles without human drivers is the next big thing in society. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+06661a7aad6d,732394E7D26E,"Already, automakers have created cars that need human assistance when in dangerous situations. These vehicles will provide saftey, comfort, and cleanliness to a world that needs it. Everyone's main goal is to stay safe when they are on the road. With these new vehicles, no one will have to worry about all of the dangers presented today. The cars will brake, accelerate and drive wherever the driver desires. Without all of the stress of long trips, people will be able to rest and be alert for whatever is thrown their way. No one will have to intervene unless absolutely necessary. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7bed3fcf737,732394E7D26E,Many car companies and other organizations have decided to fund a driverless car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9d79b344f74e,732394E7D26E,"I beieve that it is the right thing to do, and that all will benefit from the experience. At some point, many will realize that computers are smarter than humans in many ways. Even though many think that the computers will have internal failure and create issues, I do not think that is the case. Companies involved in this new technology will test the product far before the release of any of their final product. The last thing they want is to have a disaster of driverless car failure. The fact that people support these ideas rather than oppose them shows that the majority of the population will want these vehicles on the street. The advancements that are currently being made and the support of the public make a point. Completely driverless cars will be here soon, and it is only a matter of time before everyone is introduced. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48a117404db4,732394E7D26E,"Autonomous cars are soon to be here, and soon everyone will recognize the new technology rolling around the streets. The acknowlegement of this accomplishment is astounding to all that try to understand it. This is the new normal, and it is sure to go on for years to come. Everyone will want to see a car that no one has to drive. This is how far technology and understanding has gotten people. Never in anyone's wildest dreams did they think of a car without a human behind the wheel. Now, people do not have to try to believe it. They are going to have to accept and understand that it is happening ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+826be8ca6a6e,733DB414740E,I think that students should be required to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d1420c6fae36,733DB414740E,So that instead of students always doing things for themselves they should do something for someone else for a change. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17779f6f499a,733DB414740E,"will say this to all the students.
+
+Why stay in the house all day playing video games, doing nothing, just watching television? When you could be helping someone in need or help the environment get healthy
+
+One way you can help your community is by planting a tree, giving food to the homeless, volunteering at an animal shelter or a homeless shelter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7eb587464c6f,733DB414740E,You maybe want to change your life ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+001d74a4af6c,733DB414740E,"help someone change theirs. How would you feel if you really needed help or wanted to make a change but no one will help you and no one will support you in any way what so ever, what do you think will happen to you if your homeless or don't have enough oxygen because you never tried to plant a tree not a day in your life? 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7d49fd4a2647,733DB414740E,Don't think for a second that there isn't a person animal or plant the doesn't need your help! ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+76d11d1fe992,735346F7F34E,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend class from home by way of online or video conferencing. Doing so, it would make it more easier on the schools behave because then they do not have to worry about the transportation. Also the schools will not have to worry about anything could going wrong while trying to pick up the student. Others may say that students that live in far distance may have a better chance at doing it and also would probably have a better pathway for the rest of there school years. Although some may believe that "" students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home"" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1e0ef48560f5,735346F7F34E,it should be known that students would not benefit from attending classes at home because of many great reasoning. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c578d2a31aee,735346F7F34E,Students would not benefit more from being able to attending classes from home because the would not have Hands On Learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b5bbfd53154,735346F7F34E,"By the students getting hands on learning they would have a way better chance if understanding and remembering what they have learn threw out the whole day. Students would not also benefit from being able to attending classes from home because the students not getting commutation. If the student do not know how to do something they would depend on the teacher help to see it visually and get it broken down to them step by step hence the video call can do the same but do the student really understand it on video or understand it more in person because the teacher can get know the student and understand there problems and then figure out a way to make it more better for the student the are teaching. Students would also not benefit more from being able to attending classes from home because by the student receiving a more educational resource. Education Resource consist: field trips, experiments, and group effort which the individual will not receive if they are taking a distance learning. Additionally, Distance learning would take all the fun and all the other benefits the students would want to receive for example: clubs, sports, and extra help on the class they need help on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9c2ee7f1f23,735346F7F34E,Others may still say that some students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because its better for the students needs. Some students doesn't even probably are more comfortable being in a public environment anyways so they find it best to stay home. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a23fe5e638ec,735346F7F34E,"Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because the students could gain success off of it doing their talent in their own shape, way, and form without any judgment from anybody. The student would gain more success from it by it being done at there own pace and by it being done at there own pace they can be able to have a better chance at remember everything they need to know by there future. Students would also benefit from attending class from being able to attend classes from home because there would be any drama. The student that have to do the online classes would have avoid or be in trouble at all through how long the choice to take the online classes from home. Additionally, Distance learning in this category would take all the problems away for people that does not want nor need it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+25024d4cda2d,735346F7F34E,"Even though some may believe that ""students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home"" ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+70369a268a79,735346F7F34E,it should be known that student would not benefit from attending classes at home. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+98187567ac0c,735346F7F34E,"Therefore the students should not be able to attend classes from home because student would take it seriously and probably stop doing it during the year. Some student should also not do the attend classes from home because will need the hands on learning and the after school time to do the make up that they had deciede to leave undone. Student should also not also take the online offer because of the fact that they are going to need the commucation. Some students would probably also need the visual learning and will need a teacher to talk to the while the try to do it, the step by step process. In conclusion is not for every student in learning purpose. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+98e8a0786347,7361AA14D6EE,Today I would like to point out why we should keep with the program Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b08e093887ce,7361AA14D6EE,In the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qulified citizens ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+844447facd77,7361AA14D6EE,","" as stated in the articel
+
+What is the Electoral College? by The Office of Federal Register . Which makes the Electoral a great part of doing the highst or popular vote of President. Not only that but""
+
+each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors.
+
+"" which helps them amd still be equal enough to the other runing President. In the article
+
+The Indefensible Electoral Colloege: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong it says in the bottem of the fist paragraph ""
+
+This year voters can expect another close election in which popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders.
+
+"" which is saying that most Americans prefre to have this electoral college for popular votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01b5f4d6837f,7361AA14D6EE,"Reading in the article
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President they point out the ""
+
+when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors....but each part selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the part's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+924fd0841126,7361AA14D6EE,""" to repeat that trust is rarely betrayed so that means the Electoral College is something you can count on. "" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+039125f4191e,7361AA14D6EE,The Electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution... ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f405f612635d,7361AA14D6EE,""" balancing the large states will help more knowing that Electoral College is to do the job. The Electoral College help avoid run off- elections in the same article it explains an example of what will happen if Electoral College is no there. ""
+
+Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College...there is pressure for run-off elections when no canidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is recued by the Electoral College,... ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3dd4c045397c,7361AA14D6EE,Keeping the system Electoral College is a great system that needs to stay. State Senator it would be caotic if the system didnt exist. Keeping the system have and still will solve some of outr voting problems.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f0884e492eef,7388CA48B5E1,The goverment uses a system of elctoral votes well i dont think we should during the presidential election ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb54ea2175f7,7388CA48B5E1,we shouldnt have an electoral vote because as always there would be a close election and the person with the popular vote can somtimes lose the presidency ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aca67ff30946,7388CA48B5E1,"and yet the electoral college still has its deffenders what gives"". ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+0e545fd820a5,7388CA48B5E1,The bad thing is knowyone really votes for the president with an electoral college ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ed6e435d7df0,7388CA48B5E1,"depending on what state you live in you""ll have a certain amount of demacrat for the person an a certain amount of republican and depending on who you chose theyll get those 34 votes why is that fair. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1355c8c0682,7388CA48B5E1,Electoral colleges can really mess things up because when you vote you vote for somyone who wouldnt even be in the public office ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d67934b56b8,7388CA48B5E1,so who are vyou really voting for somtimes the state conventions make them choose who thier voting for. most of all this process can really confuse you and make you choose the wrong canidate. Then if theres a tie then the votes get xent somwere else were morev strangers that you dont know vote on youre votes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66cb9afbb567,7388CA48B5E1,The goverment uses a system of electoral votes i dont think we should do that because every state has an uneven number of electoral votes wich can kinda throw the hole voting process off so  let the people have thier own say in wh they want to vote for         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a77c5f71d376,738E215A237A,"The topic of keeping or changing the Electoral College has beeen around for quite some time. Some may argue that it is an unfair way to vote for presidency, although some may think otherwise. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1e5be569dc2c,738E215A237A,The Electoral College provides different opportunities for other political members as well by the common people. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b99ffdae26b2,738E215A237A,In this voting method you are able to trust each member running ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1481dabd2a0b,738E215A237A,they are for people who wants to express himslef politically ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+58042c28395f,738E215A237A,in balances political weight throughout. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+452d6ec018d7,738E215A237A,The Electoral College requires candidates that are trustworthy not only to others but to everyone. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a4ca0a90427e,738E215A237A,"Slate Magazine that ,""... each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee..."" This basicaly means that we get to choose which candidate that we can trust with more big political problems.  This shows that we will be heard through these electors that we know we can trust. Although it different cases, this might become a democratic problem from we are not able to speak personally, atleast we know how they will manage and work the elections properly. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4697c81773b0,738E215A237A,"Different people have different perspectives on several things,especially when it comes to politics. Political places need the different views of other people to be able to make a non biased decision. They want to see how others feel and think about different situations ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c333ca8fa9e,738E215A237A,"By keeping the Electoral College, we will be able to express our different political references. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+513a4111003e,738E215A237A,"it was stated that ""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political reference..."". In defense to the Electoral College, people who were to vote are the same people who wants to express how they feel about one thing. The people who vote might feel so strongly about political situation than others. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+290565828638,738E215A237A,this may become a problem for it is not a democratic way. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8207fb1c1195,738E215A237A,"Although I argue so. The people living in the country or city has the equal amount of chance to be heared and be represented by talented, intelligent,and trustworthy people. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dab5c158eb17,738E215A237A,"The process of the Electoral College provides an even political balance throughout a nation, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97162c1dc6ee,738E215A237A,"By cponducting the process of the Electoral College, it will create a more homogeneous region throughout the country. We will get the same equal rights and chances as well as people across the nation. Political balance is hard to keep withing a big state, although large states can be simmered down with Electoral College. It does not only do that for large states, but it also help the even smaller states. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b714bdecd63,738E215A237A,"Electoral College has been an efiicient way that has been around for years to select reperesentatives in each state that may have a bigger chance in politics in the future. As the people of one country, we are able to get our voices heard throughtout the world. The Electoral College contains people who you are able to trust, the people who can express their political views very clearly, and that it provides political balance throughout.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e09559e69884,73A5A2871074,Should new technology be shut down before it has a chance to prove itself? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+782e1ae5f7a1,73A5A2871074,the driverless cars should be developed and permited for use on public roads. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d02e919d07df,73A5A2871074,"As common technology improves and computers get smarter, sensors get more accurate, and technology becomes more reliable, the driverless cars stand more of a chance against the roads of today. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+36d34bd72d78,73A5A2871074,"BMW already has a driving assistant that can drive at low speeds like in traffic jams. However, most cars are never completely driverless and still require a skilled driver to take over when the going gets tough. But soon enough will they be ready to use anytime, anywhere. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa97e0a359e7,73A5A2871074,"The current technology, used to make driverless cars a possibility, is good enough for easy going roads and still rely on a driver to take overat times. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a19a30a9e468,73A5A2871074,"In the passage it states, ""Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own"". This points out that as time goes by and things move along in sensors for safety, things in the driverless catagory are getting more accurate to prevent mishaps. Driverless cars are also helped out by the fact that they can get to the point of being able to drive far more accuratly that any human driver, but it may take some time for technology to reach this level of accuracy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e8788d6c1b5,73A5A2871074,"Semi-driverless cars are a thing that can just be in the backround to aid drivers in situations and provide them with a way to get away from the stress of traffic, making them better drivers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+826fe062e051,73A5A2871074,"In the passage it states, ""In 2013, BMW announced the development of 'Traffic Jam Assistant.' The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph"". This show that some car big car makers are transitioning to driverless or semi-driverless cars very soon. Large automakers like BMW have a huge reputation that they need to live up to. They wouldn't risk that on something that could cause many issues later on. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7af8f11820de,73A5A2871074,"Most lawmakers are against the use of driverless cars on public roads because of a safety concerns, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+90148eb2821d,73A5A2871074,but the developers have said that anything that exists today are still not entirely drivereless and cannot handle most things that apear in driving. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e0e0e08b94f3,73A5A2871074,"In the passage is says, ""...but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues"". This means that things are not perfect and still require a driver behind the wheel. If everything worked perfect, the driverless cars would be the best drivers on the roads today due to their inceaced accuracy and speed at which they can make decisions. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d255a459240e,73A5A2871074,"Driverless cars should be allowed to operate on public roadways. The technology behind them, once perfected, will provide the safest cars avaliable today by avoiding the crashes. Times change and the laws should be changed to follow time and the new technology that follows. Even though the newest technology isn't the best right now, it should be given time to grow and mature into the technology of tomorow to provide the safest driving experience. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+164a147f029e,73AE93492275,Technology advances every day making human life a lot easier. All technology is meant to make human life easier. Driverless cars is a technology that has been around for several years and that keeps improving with every year. this will bring them to the market very soon ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fcbe00a15c1f,73AE93492275,Driverless cars would be a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6e85697b91f5,73AE93492275,they would provide more safety as technology keeps improving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd584ca76617,73AE93492275,they would make a lot easier for a human to drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0327e3c75086,73AE93492275,One of the reasons driverless cars would be a good idea is for safety ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c5614f0e13f,73AE93492275,"safety is a big and important concern when it comes to driving. Manufacturers are working every year to make these cars more independent and safe to drive. Improvements in these cars include sensor improvement, computer hardware and software to make the care saftier and more independent. As technology keeps growing these cars are being equipped with all these new sensors, cameras, and computers that improve the car's system and ability to drive independently. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6274a2539fbb,73AE93492275,as all technologies it would make human's life easier in a certain way in this case driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bfbb785bb4e,73AE93492275,"A person driving a driverless car would have the advantage of doing other activites while driving. Activites like texting, look around an unknown place while driving and other type of activites would be possible with this technology. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4ce5b51f5d18,73AE93492275,in-car entertaining. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43c983e2dcfa,73AE93492275,"Drivers would get bored waiting to get to their location and manufacturers know that and because of that they are thinking about including in-car entertainment. Imagine going from one state to another, sitting back watching TV while your car does the hard work for you or try to video call a family member and show them the city you live in. All these things and more could be possible if driverless cars come to the market. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8002db8bb140,73AE93492275,"Driving a car can be very difficult sometimes with all the traffic, getting a phone call, not seeing a pedestrian and many other things that a driver has to be aware of when driving. As technology keeps improving these cars keep improving as well. These driverless cars could make driving easier for humans, more enjoyable and more safe and they could also change the world and the way we live by providing us with all these advantages that are not available at the moment. Manufacturers should keep improving these cars and the states should change the law and make the driving of these cars legal.      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2301b5b282a5,73B7AA4CFB1C,"I believe your second policy on cell phones is the best choice. From being a student and experiencing what students do, your second policy is the right choice ",Position,Effective,,,
+9313f292ace9,73B7AA4CFB1C,"I think that if you allow students to use cell phones during free times, they will abuse this rule and sneak their phones to class ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b085d1240ef2,73B7AA4CFB1C,"My second reason is that students must pay attention to their school work, rather than their friends ",Claim,Effective,,,
+db320179a7d5,73B7AA4CFB1C,my last reason is that students will get into trouble being allowed to use them in school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3d40dade5b72,73B7AA4CFB1C,"From being a student in school for many years, I know that your second policy is the better choice because kids my abuse the rules, won't be concentrating on their work, and they will get in trouble. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e44255a4414a,73B7AA4CFB1C,"If students are allowed the use of cell phones during free time only, most would abuse this policy. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+df94505283c0,73B7AA4CFB1C,"During lunch or free time, children will have conversations on their phones with their friends. After lunch, these students will still be in a conversation and will continue it. Students will be sneaking their phones into classes just to finish talking to their friends. This policy will be abused by these kids and more and more kids will have phones in class than intended. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c0fc18dd4c7,73B7AA4CFB1C,Banning phones in school is the right choice because school is a place of learning. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0b5b62aec575,73B7AA4CFB1C,"If students do use their cell phones, they will not be paying attention to the teacher or what they need to know. Without the second policy, students' grades will drop lower and lower because they are not learning what they need to. This is just one more reason why the only way to go is to ban phones in schools at all times. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a0cfc5ea45c2,73B7AA4CFB1C,"If cell phones are allowed in school, there is a chance that children will get into trouble ",Claim,Effective,,,
+da8eeba47462,73B7AA4CFB1C,"Many stories have been heard on the news about teenagers getting hurt from cell phone use. If students are allowed to use cell phones, who's to say they will always use them properly. Phones should be modified by parents so that their children are safe. The second policy is the only choice because it will prevent the dangers of phone use from happening. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f07d49d52ff5,73B7AA4CFB1C,"As a current student in middle school, I have learned how children use cell phones. If you are reconsidering the cell phone policy, I believe the second one is the only way to go. Children in this school may sneak their cell phones into class without the teacher ever knowing if they are not banned. This will also lead to students doing poorly in class because they won't be paying attention to the teacher. Also, the use of cell phones in a wrong way can cause a student to get hurt. Overall, I believe your second policy to ban cell phones in class is the best choice because after being a student in school, I know what will happen if they are allowed in school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e08f549039ef,73D69658CF95,"Some schools are offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. For those who can pay a fee for it would be perfect because they have the material to do that, like enternet, computer, or any other device to joing by online or video conferencing classes ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+95f1330d3258,73D69658CF95,"Some students woul benefit from being able to attend classes from home, but just those who really need it, like students with disability or health problems ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d91cecd4ef76,73D69658CF95,"It would not benefit students whom have a hundred percent of their ability to develop anything, it would make them more lazy than what they normally are ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+06203af01a5e,73D69658CF95,"Generic_Name is a student who has a hundred percent of his ability but he does not like go to school. He is always skiping classes and never make homework. Generic_Name is a student with health problems who can not assist to school like a normal teenager because he has to be connect to a oxygen tank twenty four, seven. Generic_Name does not want to go to school and Generic_Name can not do that. The school which both of them used to attend is offering a distance learning program for students and the first two students who joing are Generic_Name and Generic_Name. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b396e3c0a147,73D69658CF95,"If schools decide to create this program for students, them most priorize at the moment to acept students. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6040d0756f7,73D69658CF95,Distance learning program as an option for students to attend classes from home. It would benefit thousands of students whom really want to learn and be successful in their life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6183cdb4adad,73D69658CF95,"If schools which have this program available for students allow students like Generic_Name and Generic_Name to be part of it. The one who is going to be benefit more would be Generic_Name because he is the one who really need this program, he is the one who want to learn new stuff, he is the one who want be someone in the future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27ac18947f7a,73D69658CF95,"Generic_Name would be just one more of those students who are trying to take the easy way for everything, acting like if the world goes around him ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+91f0fec47e7f,73D69658CF95,But there is also an amount of students who can not have access to enternet or any electronic device to access to the online classes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e28333b0b681,73D69658CF95,So it turns a problem for those who does not have acces to any of those things and has health problems like Generic_Name or who does not have enough money to have what they need to participate. The online classes would be hard to them no matter what. If schools created a plan for those students it would be more easy to them to develop themself. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15248b545d14,73D69658CF95,"In conclusion some schools are offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home, for students who does not have a hundred percent of their ability, student with health problems, students who really need it. Them also may create a program that help students without enough economy to take those classes. If schools are creating new ways or programs for those whom really need it, them most think about all the needs that them have and try to supply it, not with a hundred percent but helping with what they can. So students can learn and be successful n the future. Remembering that the one that are students right now, are the future of the world ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a3f5974638f6,73D6F19E24BD,The students are very mad that the principal is considering that you have to have a b average instead of having a c average to play sports or other activities. At the school ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c6096e28288b,73D6F19E24BD,so I think you need to do good in school to play or do school. stuff ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+2d580a814436,73D6F19E24BD,"or you can talk to the principal and try to change his mind and get people to play, or you can talk to the teachers and get them to change his mind ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+5de742e9c5b0,73D6F19E24BD,that will work to he mite do it and he mite not any way you tried to get him to change his mind ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+afb9ca65d5b0,73D6F19E24BD,if you do good in school that mite do the trick to. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+fa1b207a047c,73D6F19E24BD,If you do not change the policy i will not do any work at the school and we will be arguing about this. Do not think we will let this go we will not. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+673e51708934,73DC1D49FAD5,eletoral college can be a very good thing cause it can mean also picking other electors. this can help us and our state alot. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7d4e31eb7ae7,73DC1D49FAD5,Electoral Collge gives a chances for people in the Republican or Demicrat party to also vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67a70dc715c3,73DC1D49FAD5,"You would have to let your state elctors also have the chance to let them pick a canidate chance on who they would want as president. According to the
+
+Office of the federal register they qoute ""The Electoral Collge consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to electoral votes is required to elect the president"" (source 1). Each canidates electors are chosen threw witch partys they are in and are also chosen to give a chance to vote. I do think we should keep the Electoral college because it gives a chance for even electors to vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bcbeea56c410,73DC1D49FAD5,when we vote we are also voteing for electors to work with the presidents and help him make desions. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2331710412d8,73DC1D49FAD5,"Accoriding to bradford plumer he qoutes that "" The single  best argument against the electoral colloge is what we might call the disatser factor"" (source 2). Even though electors votes it can lead to more of an unoraginized distaster. it can mainly lead to a lot of confusion and miss counts. a lot of people do not like the fact of electors being one just like the presidnet of untied states. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3bd96ff80778,73DC1D49FAD5,what a lot of people dont know when they vote they are also voteing for other electors. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+56c92e8dd025,73DC1D49FAD5,"A lot of americans do not trust the Electoral College because they feel its not right to also be chooseing electors at the same time. they feel it is unfair and not nesscary. They should have sepreate elections for electors.
+
+Richard A. posner qoutes that ""When you vote for a presidential canidate you're actaully voting for a slate of electors"" (source 3). Alot of people do not like the sound of that because they think its kinda like a secret.              ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+05714ef45440,74036EED2163,I think that they should do voting by the popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a76fc415cb57,74036EED2163,it should be what the people feel most comfortable choosing ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+62ed21d10cf0,74036EED2163,they shouldnt have the electoral college ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b91ca4db5b5,74036EED2163,It can be argued that the electoral  college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. Democrats in texas for example or republicans in california knowing their vote will have no effect they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign that they would have if the president were picked by popular but of course no voters vote swings a national election and in spite of that about one half the elgible american population did vote in 2012 election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3e6568607f3,74036EED2163,"A dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible it happened in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote the reason is that the winning candidates share of the electoral college invairably exceeds his share of the popular vote in 2012's election for example Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney .  . . . because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner take all basis even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral vote victory in that state A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes 538 is an even number but it is higly unlikely ..... 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ba60497292cd,74036EED2163,I think those two paragraphs from this passage explains why i would like for people to just do popular voting because it makes the people comfortable and who they feel will make a america as best as it can be. That person who is being elected should feel proud and make america safe is what i stronlgy agree and i think others should to because it is a great choice. The elctoral college consist of the selection of the electors the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress and i feel like thats a little too much when people can just vote instead of getting someone as a president who their not comfortable with or familiar with and dont know anything about the person so everyone just vote by the people for the people.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f6e14baacbb4,743F1B934A96,Electoral college should be changed to election by popular vote for the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b757508e8fef,743F1B934A96,Because of electoral college electors tried changing votes in favor of the opponent because sometimes they werent located where they wanted to be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fc939152a76,743F1B934A96,Passage 3: In defense of the Electoral College states that the electoral college is a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by delaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b61195ce79dd,743F1B934A96,"On passage 2:The indefensable electoral college says under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of the president ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+36308e8aa4cb,743F1B934A96,Electoral college should be replaced withe the election by popular vote for the president because electoral college is causing to much crisis ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3e5f0a983bb,743F1B934A96,"For example, on source 2: The indefensible electoral college  says that if you lived in Texas and you wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry even though you are not voting for electors just for John Kerry. Electoral college makes you or forces you to do things you arent aware of. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb7f5ec6dfe3,743F1B934A96,If electoral college replaced with the vote of the President i'll find it pretty fair because I dont think the President of the United States is going to cheat on the election of the electors. Every vote should be fair. Since electors can be anyone the electoral college process seems unfair to me. on source 2 says that the best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. People should be fair when voting.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d57a1a6dbffc,7440926E8961,Google has had cars that could drive independently since 2009 under certain conditions . Driverless cars would have a huge impact in our world today with both a positive and negative affect. Google cofounder Serger Brin belives that the future of driveless cars a form a future of public taxi system. This would have a postiive affect because the cars would half of the fuel of todays taxi and would more flexible than a bus. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4013a8be0ec8,7440926E8961,"Driverless cars are coming soon and has been used before, these will soon be able to help us and change the world, they will soon change the way we look at cars today. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+20aa665a6730,7440926E8961,Google cars have been known to drive more than half a million miles without a crash . This showes that they are safe but arent completly driveless ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+581d9c5b0d07,7440926E8961,The use of driverless cars beneifits use because they arent driverless in certain conditions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e36dd10d236d,7440926E8961,"This will have a negative affect because they should be able to work under all condition of driving. Driverless cars can have negative aspect and positve aspect on the driving laws . In a negative way these cars cant function in certain areas and this can disrupt driving , it is also illgeal to even test computer driven cars in most states ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c5de73d6915d,7440926E8961,in a postive way these are allowed to be tested in most states and upgraded to the point of the driver can receive alters to notify them on things. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+490e78595bbe,7440926E8961,"In 2016 Telsa has projected the use of a computer driven car, with 90 percent of autopilet driving system an used most of the time. otyher cars like Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan have pakned to relase the version of a computer driven car in 2020. These cars a ere soon to realese and they will help with many driving difficulties that we encounter today. This will have a positive outcome in our world. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c6ca438386dd,74540DF965DE,"Driverless cars seem like a great idea. They would use less gas, not pollute the world as much, and many more reasons. There are also many negative things about them. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b0a19c24acae,74540DF965DE,dangerous ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+176e7cedb64b,74540DF965DE,"not reliable, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0836905f41d0,74540DF965DE,expensive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aea645311540,74540DF965DE,Driverless cars sounds dangerous in general. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43019e378009,74540DF965DE,"The best way to insure safety is to have an actual person behind the wheel. Even if the car is not fully driverless, the driver could fall asleep or be distracted when the car is notifying them to take control. Even if the number one rule for the driver is to stay alert and to be ready to drive at all times, we are human and we are going to get distracted. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+409f88429e1c,74540DF965DE,they are not fully reliable. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aadd36a92645,74540DF965DE,"Any technology we have is not 100% reliable. The system can break down in the middle of the road, and someone could die. We should not risk our safety or our lives on a machine that is not fully safe. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de6209c828da,74540DF965DE,"Yes, the cars we have today are not fully reliable either, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+253f7919ec39,74540DF965DE,they are safer than a machine in complete control. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a148de84849b,74540DF965DE,driverless cars seem really expnsive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08c4d0dca9d1,74540DF965DE,"In order for them to work they have to build all new roads to ensure the safety of pedestrians, drivers, and passangers. They also have to pay for all of the research that goes into building a working driverless car. All of the money spent on these cars could be used to pay off the trillion dollar debt the United States is currently in, or it could be used to help the homeless get back up on their feet and get a home again. There are plenty of things we could use the money for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9eba70d2ace,74540DF965DE,driverless cars seem like a waste of money and time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d65cf77c91f0,74540DF965DE,"We have working cars that have been working fine for years. So why waste money on cars that are dangerous, not reliable, and expensive? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1cebced0d9ef,745F2414FCA9,"Dear Florida senator, we should keep the Electoral College. The Electoral College has been around for decades, produced by the founding fathers, it was made as a compromise between the two different ways the president should be elected. One way being by a slate of senators, and another by simply popular vote. It was made so that citizens could still have their vote, but more politically advanced senators could make a decision. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1d676cefb573,745F2414FCA9,The Electoral College is not only more efficiant but it lets the citizens keep their votes as well. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+48781c884e9d,745F2414FCA9,"I favor the Electoral College instead of popular vote because it helps avoid run-off elections, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b6a438aa8920,745F2414FCA9,it uses the winner-takes-all method ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0917383b4828,745F2414FCA9,gives equal oppourtunity to smaller states. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dbd3dde60d18,745F2414FCA9,"Run-off elections, as known as, the gigantic issue with a popular vote election system ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6ab10a1dc39e,745F2414FCA9,"In 1968, Nixon, and in 1992, Clinton, both only had about 43 percent of the popular votes which was not enough. This is a problem because it complicates the presidential electon process. This is where the Electoral College comes in hand; the outcome of the votes becomes very clear this way ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aa3fc5925c7f,745F2414FCA9,". Instead of dealing with tricky numbers and percentages, the electoral college uses the ""winner-takes-all"" method. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2b05180a8433,745F2414FCA9,"The winner-takes-all method is as literal as it sounds; the winner takes all. For example if someone was running for president and they got 301 votes and 370 electoral college votes, they would win (you only need a majority of 270 votes to be elected. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bdb43253b607,745F2414FCA9,"Lastly, using the Electoral College benefits smaller states ",Claim,Effective,,,
+eb68568a12cb,745F2414FCA9,"Think of this, you live in Maine, or Hawaii, or somewhere with a smaller population than Florida or California- your state would not have really that much of a impact on who wins the electon. Although, you cannot choose who your state senators in the end vote for, there's a greater chance of your state having a bigger impact. It naturally balences out some of the more heavier politically impacting states. Even though things are equal, in the long run larger states (population wise) will get more attention than states with a smaller population. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6582cb7ec887,745F2414FCA9,"There are upsides and downsides to the Electoral College, but from a political perspective it is crystal clear that it is a better choice. Citizens for popular vote do believe it is unfair to the voters having a board of senators making the big vote/impact on the president, but those senators are highly trusted people who know what they're doing. I favor the Electoral College over popular vote because it helps avoid run-off elections, it uses the winner-takes-all method, and gives equal oppourtunity to smaller states.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5922babc4c05,746BC0AD4761,they need to keep the most popular one by elections because it would be fair to people to have the electoral votes. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6b300e0170c6,746BC0AD4761,i think that people should vote on what they want to do not the senate or house of the united states . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12cf8963fb75,746BC0AD4761,it seems to me that the votes keep going down because people dont like the way they have to vote its going astronomical they need to take control NOW ! ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1d685c9181cc,746BC0AD4761,"Even though candidates might now want to spend time going through the head ache of focusing on because to me its the most baic level and it UNFAIR to all voters all around the globe . Allthough my opinion is people need to realize to some of the overruled voters are all not electoral college dont mean you cannot vote for regular its entirely inpossible for the ""new president"" not to win and thats one reason why people pick that source because they know for a fact that they wll win their president they voted for this on coming ""election"" . ALL votes go to the house / state senate and it goes uphill from there so according to the passage all the electroal college requires a presidental candidate to have a regional appeal . But in 2012 President Barak Obama almost didnt make president until they put the electroal votes all together and we won PRESIDENT !! But of course knowing your vote you need to have to pay attition to the camapaign that the presidentcy were picked by a popular more VOTE . Even though votes swing on a national election one and a half americans express a petherance than a acual single vote which is probalbly much faster and easier on us and the senate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5b7683a43acd,746BC0AD4761,Knowing that people want to make sure our country stays in place they vote the correct presdient for the next four years so make the correct descision.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+22f38edb477f,7480BDC7C131,I think that it isn't right to change the school policy because some students cant pull there grade up to a B or higher. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3f15da807142,7480BDC7C131,i think that it should stay the way it is because a C is still a passing grade and its hard to focus on 2 things at once ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d8d3a8185514,7480BDC7C131,there is always homework that you have to do or a test that you have to study for and you have to practice for a game that's coming up or you have to go to practice so that means you wont have that much time to finish your homework or study for the next test that's coming up and you cant finish your notebook for the notebook check that's coming up so its hard to focus on 2 things at once. so if you just keep it the way it is then it will be less stressful for the students and they will have less things to worry about. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6870443ebe94,7480BDC7C131,I think that it will be reasonable if you don't let students play sports if they have a F or a D because that isn't a passing grade so they wont have 2 things to worry about at once because they will only be focusing on school only. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+79179bb03b70,7480BDC7C131,it will be easier for most kids in this school ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b7dced99f052,74A95DB15E93,I think kids should not have to do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0cbf366b0358,74A95DB15E93,I think kids that have committed a crime should be forced to do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a3ac80bf2d9,74A95DB15E93,"Also i think that if a kid volunteers to do community service then they can, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+232b72124755,74A95DB15E93,i do not think a kid should just be told to go pick up all the trash around the city for no apparent reason. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fee6138aaed6,74A95DB15E93,it will teach them not to do whatever it is that they did again. The child should be given a task and a certain amount of hours to do this said task. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e11c24809790,74A95DB15E93,I also think that if you volunteer for community service that should be aloud. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+400d9f664954,74A95DB15E93,An example of this is if there was graffiti on a wall in the city i think a group of kids can volunteer and paint the wall and cover the graffiti. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+678b9187b818,74A95DB15E93,Another opinion i have is that you should not force the kids. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42cec82c0560,74A95DB15E93,What if they have things to do such as sports or other activities. Also it takes to much time for kids they want to do other things not read to children younger kids all day. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4c0a51a9261,74A95DB15E93,I think my opinions seem fair enough and better than forcing the children. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4668e0d0157b,74CA2200A7FB,"Controversial. This is the word that can describe the Electoral College in recent elections. The Electoral College is composed of 538 votes, a presidential candidate must acquire 270 to win the election. States with large populations get more electoral votes so say, Rhode Island. California gets 55 votes while the puny Rhode Island gets a whopping 3 votes. The Electoral College has been debated since the 2000 election, where Al Gore lost even though he got more popularity votes. Many folks believe the Electoral College should be abolished. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8b7fd14ccde4,74CA2200A7FB,"I believe that the Electoral College should be kept in the presidential elections, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e1c9a6eec81e,74CA2200A7FB,"because it shows a clear winner, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed03839f183d,74CA2200A7FB,"it ensures it is, ""Everyone's President"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97043780fd90,74CA2200A7FB,educated voters count in the swing states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+941aadb59dc4,74CA2200A7FB,"and it avoids Run-Off Elections. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+014e57424d24,74CA2200A7FB,"Without the Electoral College, some elections may be hard to decide a true winner. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f832a4c837f,74CA2200A7FB,"No matter the situation, the Electoral College will determine a winner, if the popular vote and electoral vote become tied, (which is highly unlikely,) the vote will be taken to the senate. Each senator counts as one vote, so no longer do bi states matter. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a54c0f566d1,74CA2200A7FB,"Also, the Electoral College ensures the presidential candidates have trans-regional appeal. It makes the votes count, the president chose is surely, ""Everyone's President, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2dd01c97943,74CA2200A7FB,rather than a favorite in just northeastern states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f82eefabe5d3,74CA2200A7FB,"Furthermore, swing states are tremendously important to the outcome of the election. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+586befa58e1f,74CA2200A7FB,"States such as Florida, New York, Texas and California have dozens of votes combined, winning all four of those states pretty much means presidency. The swing states not only have more electoral votes because of population, but because of their voters. On average, there are more educated voters in the swing states, they actually stay up to date, watch the news and know the means of each candidate ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71da4e800816,74CA2200A7FB,"The Electoral College also avoids the disaster of which no cadidate receives a majority of the votes cast. A good example of this is when Clinton had only 43% of the popular votes won, yet he got a whopping 370 electoral votes, which made him president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+215edbeecb62,74CA2200A7FB,The pressure of having a run-off election is nearly vanished by the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b281daf4cb1a,74CA2200A7FB,"Although others say that the Electoral College should be abolished, because in that system, voters vote a slate of electors, not the president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6a9419080325,74CA2200A7FB,"Well tough , the Electoral College ensures a winner, and that is all that matters. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a346203599d8,74CA2200A7FB,"The Electoral College should, for sure, be kept in the Presidential Election system. It consists of 538 total votes, and 270 votes have to go to a candidate to pick a winner. Although the votes may tie up, which is nearly impossible, the Electoral College ensures another method to decide the presidency. The Electoral College produces a sure winner, ""Everyone's President,"" is elected, educated voters are in the swing states and it avoids the disaster of a Run-Off Election. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ec72b838f2c4,74DD3C49B848,"Around my community, there has been a lot of talk about how the president should be elected into office. Whether it is from the electorial college or by popular vote. This is a very important matter to me because it can change how our country is. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8053fa833cf8,74DD3C49B848,"In my opinion, it should be by the electorial college. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+aec6df798ead,74DD3C49B848,why you wouldnt want to take the process of the electorial college to pick a president? All of the pieces seem to fall into place. So isnt it the obvious choice? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f4ba7b24e06,74DD3C49B848,"the person who gets the most ammount of votes gets to be the president. Thats as simple as it can get. And in my opinion, it is as fair as it gets. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8b83e797e2a,74DD3C49B848,It is also not a democratic method of selecting the next person in office. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3ffd126260c5,74DD3C49B848,look into the elctoral college. It is obviously the right choice. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e6a4fdc9d3de,74F07823BCB9,I beleive that students will benefit in many ways from more schools offering distance learning as an option to attand class from home. ,Position,Effective,,,
+2aadd7f4dfaa,74F07823BCB9,"It gives students, at home sick, the opportunity to keep up with the pace of the class, instead of missing a day. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0863937bed8f,74F07823BCB9,"Many schools are currently integrating technology into learning wherever possible, with adding this option other perks come with it such as extra help from teachers after hours and the ability to partake in discussion. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9001369c6b47,74F07823BCB9,"Distance learning also benefits students that may suffer from social anxiety or bullying, they would now have the option to learn from a very comfortable and familiar environment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f4d109df40c8,74F07823BCB9,"When students miss school due to illness, they miss out on the lessons taught that day and are put in a position where their education is rushed and this affects how well the content is learned ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3a44fb4f0a30,74F07823BCB9,". However, with distance learning students who are out sick can still learn what they need for the day, and participate in class as normal. Some students who are very dedicated to their learning, may go to school when they are sick so they wont miss out on anything important. This can be dangerous to the health and well being of their classmates. With the introduction of distance learning, the sick student's classmates are safe and the student can continue with their education. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b12c59f64984,74F07823BCB9,"Many schools recently have prioritized integrating technology in the classroom wherever possible, and have seen the benefits from doing so. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+540706219307,74F07823BCB9,"Distance learning is yet another beneficial example of technology integration in the classroom. Without distance learning as an option students who miss a day have to catch up with the rest of the class by either talking to their teacher individually or getting the materials beforehand for planned absences. This puts extra stress on the students as well as the teachers who have to spend time worrying about individual students. With distance learning, however, teachers can spend more time focusing on the class as a whole and the standards of learning for all of their students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e19970343d70,74F07823BCB9,"Students who suffer from social anxiety, or are bullied in school may also benefit from distance learning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+46f1a5445bb9,74F07823BCB9,"Social anxiety may hinder a students ability to learn, especially in loud and very social settings like the classroom. being able to attend class from home would allow these students to learn in comfortable and familiar environments with less distraction form the learning that needs to be done. When students are bullied, often times they see school and the classroom as a dangerous place to be, and may spend their time there worried about being picked on, instead of focusing on learning. distance learning allows them to learn from the safety of their own home where they can focus on the lessons. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b792289fab7,74F07823BCB9,"Distance gives students more opportunities to learn from home where they can feel comfortable and safe. Students that miss school days due to health issues or any other reason can stay up to pace on the topics covered in class. When school becomes unbearable to same students they have the option to learn from home if it will improve the quality of their education. With distance learning, teachers can teach more affectively and efficiently. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+68d636952a49,75119D54385C,We should keep the elcetoral college ,Position,Effective,,,
+8520c01218e9,75119D54385C,it was made by out founding fathers and should be kept alive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26daa2386883,75119D54385C,it has been around for so long that it would be difficult getting use to the change. By keeping the electoral college we keep a non-democratic way of voting for out presidents ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f0fa2b624ae5,75119D54385C,Betrayal dosent often happen because we put trust into the people we sent to the electoral college. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5f100479fdd,75119D54385C,"By keeping the electoral college we also keep the chance of any runner winning, unlike if normal people got to have their votes count someone would always ain by a landslide ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf0c7320bf8e,75119D54385C,By also keeping the electoral college we make it so their is no chance of a tie. Like if a person from the electoral college were to betray his state. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+74bd3bf90ca3,75119D54385C,If it were to happen the state would be very disappionted and would look down upon him or her. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+501531a58b32,75119D54385C,By keeping the electoral college we make it so the its difficult for one person to betray his or her  state. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0644ab0d6f16,75119D54385C,We all expect them to make the right choise for the whole state and they feel that pressure. Everyone only influences what the person is going to pick. But some people fold under pressure and do what the  other person wants. That can also be a good thing. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6580af0b9333,75119D54385C,By putting people under pressure with a whole state on their back people would choose who ever their state wants. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffd1ced3be86,75119D54385C,If every state thinks differntly then their would still be a chance for the other person to win even if other states voted for the other person. If one person got a lot of states to like them then the other peson wouldnt stand a chance if real people were voting and they would lose against a landslide victory. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+630b03015424,75119D54385C,There would also be major fights and outbrakes of violence if we got rid of the electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cdfc5ff22879,75119D54385C,If you had a friend that voted for the person you didnt want to win and they won you would mad and argry. They would just rub it in your face and say you lost and could lead to fights or even killings. The smart desion would be to keep the electoral college. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f8bf7d5d61a3,75119D54385C,By keeping it everyone is happy and will accept things easier. But if we were to abolish it the towns and cities would go and rampage with families borken and friendships being torn apart. And we can prevent that by just keeping the electoral college.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0bbd6c70f48f,754CED955EFD,"source 1: what is the electoral collage?
+
+by the office of the federal register
+
+The electoral college is a proccess,not a place. The founding established it in the U.S. constitution as a compromise between election of the president and the congress and the election of the president by a polpular vote of qualified citizens.(
+
+paragraph, 1 sentance, 1).
+
+The electoral college consists of 538 electors a majority of 270 electors votes are required and is reqiured to elect the president(paragraph 3 sentance 1) ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+52a8b92366c8,754CED955EFD,So i belive that electoral college should be at most the most effecient way of electing a president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4ae4054c834e,754CED955EFD,because they have to persude the electorates to be on their side in order to get elected. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e84cc789902d,754CED955EFD,Wich is much harder to do that pursudeing the people there for giving us a good honest president than one that will lie or try to hurt the public in any way ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d5e91d68b153,754CED955EFD,"if their are officials going to vote for our nations president they will be much more careful of their decision,putting our nation in better hands. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+af614b656f35,754CED955EFD,five reasons to keep our method of choosing the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+36fa4e9a3110,754CED955EFD,"Richard A. Posner reason 1:
+
+Certainty Of  Outcome
+
+Dispute over  the out come is possible-it happend in 2000- but its less likely than a dispute between popular vote. the reson is that winnning candidate's share of electoral collage invariably exeeds his share of the popular vote.
+
+reason 2
+
+:
+
+Everyone's President
+
+The electoral college  requirs canadates to have trans-regional appeal. no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional such as Mitt Romneywas in the south,has so innocently favored for he gain electoral vote by increasing his plurality in those states and if done he know he'll win.
+
+reason 3
+
+:
+
+Swing States
+
+The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces  the canidates-as we saw in [2012's] election- to focus their campaign efforts on the toss up states. Voters in toss up states are more likeley to pay close attention to the campeign to really listen to the competeing canidates knowing that they are going to decide the election. They are likeley to be on the most thoughtful votes, on average(and futher reason they will have recived the most information and attention from the canidates), and the most thoughtful voters should be the one to decide the election.
+
+reason 4
+
+:
+
+Big States
+
+The electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states have (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionmentof the senate decreed in the constitution. The popular vote was very close in Florida [2012] never the less obama, who won that vote got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in woyming would net the winner got 3 electoral votes.
+
+reason 5
+
+:
+
+Avoid Run-Off Elections
+
+The electoral college avoids run-off elections wich no canindate recives a majority of the votes cast. For example , Nixion in 1968 and Clinton both had only 43% plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the electoral college. There is pressure for run-off elections when no canidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure,wichwould greatly complicate the presidential election processes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f80cfe887140,754CED955EFD,So you see that is is easier and less complex to do an electoral vote instead of a popular vote. Thats why i think it is manditory that we keep the electoral collage because it is a more orginized system that prevents some of the problems we see today.                                                                                            ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+326bb81ea0fa,757E9E1595A7,"I am writing to you today because of the issue of community service, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0a673c4bab62,757E9E1595A7,it has become apparent to me that some kids are not on board with the idea of it and think its to much work for to little pay-out. How-ever I do not agree with them ,Position,Effective,,,
+38004d45b637,757E9E1595A7,"the kids that say these things are the slackers they are board at school don't do their home work get bad grades and so-on, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+32fbf5d8e12f,757E9E1595A7,but community service is a good thing to do ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f0882319f610,757E9E1595A7,it helps other people and you get good karma for it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04881b3cd5f6,757E9E1595A7,I do think that kids should be able to chose how much they do with a minimum amount of 3 hours. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e8d93c2946a3,757E9E1595A7,"This would let the kids who challenge themselves continue to do so, and let the slackers become more used to the idea of work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e90432e2a479,757E9E1595A7,Now i' m not saying that there isn't a little bit of slacker in every one ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+dfd99abba482,757E9E1595A7,but to be successful in the job market these day you want to be a hard working individual who doesn't mind doing something for others. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1cfff6605292,757E9E1595A7,Community service will get the idea of that in their head and hopefully send them on the right path through life. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+58131f6b98ba,759754F07F7F,"The electoral college is the current method for choosing a president of the United States.  In this method, voters from each state do not vote for the president directly, they vote for people to elect the president.  Even though this system has existed for decades and decades, some people protest is and claim that it is not ""democratic"" enough. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fc11d1c75936,759754F07F7F,I will give my personal opinions on why the Electoral College should be kept. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c6712bf9bf31,759754F07F7F,The main reason for keeping the Electoral College is that it works ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9e92d6e3b44,759754F07F7F,"and has been working for over 200 years.  When a way of living has been around as long as this has, it is extremely difficult to change and convince people to support the change.  Again, it works and as the saying goes, ""if it is not broke, do not fix it.""  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65ee3cc4e776,759754F07F7F,"I can see why the people who protest the Electoral College dre against it, and that a president should be decided by the people, not electors chosen by people. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+05a93cc3aa19,759754F07F7F,However I do not think it makes much of a difference who is being trusted to do what one likes about them. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5c6558109a02,759754F07F7F,"It is either the elector is trusted to pick the right president, or the president is trusted do do the right thing.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40570e9090ff,75A635A498F4,I Think its a great idea for us to start doing community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ea630a6d7492,75A635A498F4,"Community service is an important thing because there's a lot of people that don't care about our world, and they would throw garbage on the street, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12b30ae63a0f,75A635A498F4,but we can make things better by cleaning an picking up all litters. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+975b65fa580c,75A635A498F4,This would also be good for some kids that only spend time on video games. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bc15e88747c,75A635A498F4,"they could actually help and doing something for others, instead of doing what they like to do.
+
+As the months past by we see that Our country is not the same, for these problems
+
+For example, Littering, Robbing, Pollution, etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2308f9f7082,75A635A498F4,This could also be a punishment for kids. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+34ebb064f954,75A635A498F4,"So if there were to have bad grades, You could tell them either you do better or do community service. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b6c8ba435b2f,75A635A498F4,The only thing that probably wouldn't be a good thing is if you made them do community service on weekends ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f4f86722b219,75A635A498F4,"That would just be unfair from my point of view, and im pretty sure parents would agree with me. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2004faaa62be,75A635A498F4,"Also There are also some community service that im sure people would apply to like Helping the elderly or spending time with them at nursery, And maybe taking care of pets without Owners. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e62cee55a9bc,75A635A498F4,My second Example On how Community service is good is by us older grades help out little elementary school kids. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+29efb29cb85e,75A635A498F4,How does that help? It helps because if there stuck on a question or need help with there homework. The older grades can tutor them or explain to them ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+232950f8366e,75A635A498F4,Well I hope You consider on taking this letter a help ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7abc4f0dfafd,75B4C84E8AC3,"I think that students of SCHOOL_NAME should be aloud to use their cell phones during lunch and other free times, just as long as the phones are turned off during class. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+0c21a4382604,75B4C84E8AC3,Teens in our school are getting in trouble almost everyday because they are getting their phones taken away from them in lunch and breaks in between classes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+153b4d1372e6,75B4C84E8AC3,"Then there are some students who don't really get what ""No phones in class"" means. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+852a7bc4dcd0,75B4C84E8AC3,I think that you should make it so we can have our phones out during lunch and between classes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aed8e1f2ca00,75B4C84E8AC3,"because sometimes it maybe an emergency and we need to call our parents about something that we don't want to talk about in the office phone were everyone can hear what your saying around you. Therefore if you have a cell phone you can go call your parents some were quite, were know one can hear what your saying. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+836231f33eed,75B4C84E8AC3,"This just might help you to. I am almost sure that schools have to pay a phone bill, am i right? well by letting teens use their phones you can decrease the bill, or even better get rid of all the extra phones. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f911e3c856b4,75B4C84E8AC3,"Then if you need to get a hold of someone in another room you have the PA speakers. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d038627bea83,75B4C84E8AC3,"My personal experience with office ladies listening to my conversation is very bad, 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e668add66b8,75B4C84E8AC3,"i can hear them talking about what i was talking about to my sister in the office. Well some of the things that i said where personal, not only to me but to my sister. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5770dd39dd4f,75B4C84E8AC3,"I hope you at least think about this subject and consider letting students use their phones at lunch and in between breaks we have after classes. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+31aa5b9eacdc,75B64811DC65,"First off I want to let you know that Electoral College is a process and not a place. It was established by the founding fathers. Process consists of the selection of the electors, the metings of the electors where they vote for president and Vice President. The electoral college consists of 538 electors and the majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The amount of members in its congressional delegation, ""one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two of your Senators"". The candidate that's running for president in your state has it's own group of electors. They're generally chosen by the candidate's political party but that state law varys on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65daeeab10e6,75B64811DC65,One of the best things about the Electoral College is that it's widely regarded as an anachronism and a non-democratic method of the selecting of a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes wins. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6411be09ecaf,75B64811DC65,"it also requires a president candidate to have transregional appeal. Always remember ""voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ca6a3b79814c,75C06F2B5826,In my opinion im against driverless cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54fbe970b3a7,75C06F2B5826,"not everyone is a bad driver , some people woud like to drive there own cars without anybody help or maybe people are causios of what they are doing . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae8f8357bbdd,75C06F2B5826,"Driverless cars could be a good help but then again not everybody needs one . Some might like the driverless car and soe might not because what if the car your in messes up and spins out of control or crashes into something or someone . Then the person in the car wouldnt know what to do or how to react , driverless cars could be a positive thing and a negative like if someone was in a hurry and they needed to fix there hair or clothes while driving the car would come in handy or like i said if the car spins out of control or something , i dont think most people would like the driverless car if you ask me ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55f437855166,75C06F2B5826,Driverless cars might even cause more accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cacdffb80f4,75C06F2B5826,not all cars work the same and one car might fail and cause a accident or someone getting hurt or even killed because of tecnology ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+edf62bb40b77,75C06F2B5826,i dont think all cars should be driverless some people might like to drive themselvs at there own pace and there own speed . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5733a9e41a4f,75D302ED4DF2,"To prove to my fellow collegues about the ""Face on Mars"" thing was naturally made, not by alien lifeforms, i have decided to write this paper. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cb6b23682bb5,75D302ED4DF2,"This face has shodows and yes it does make it look like it has eyes, nose, and mouth, but that just really what we want to see if you were told it was a face you would've beleived it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6302b97cdd79,75D302ED4DF2,"The article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" has a lot of suspense and it does indeed pull the reader in, and towards the end they break down the scientific facts ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2049f0829aca,75D302ED4DF2,They use examples of here on earth and they talk about the showdows. They even talk about how the resolution of photos could change the perspective of those photos. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc3237e2ebb1,75D302ED4DF2,"This face shaped mound on mars has just thrown all the theories out and has caused a big worry in the world. Personally I did not see the face until i had read through the article pretty much pin-pointing all of the features, so i went back to the picture of the face and that when i did see it. One persons theory has caused problems for everything from t. v. to conversations. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+444923697ed8,75D302ED4DF2,"The fact of the matter is that when you look at this mound and you are told its a face you are most likely gonna beleive that concept until you get the scientific facts and you read them and you probably still wont beleive it, because as humans there has always got to be something that drives you to be excited. Its in our genetics and our concept is just going to be stuck with until there is an actual reasoning that can be proven. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b89b4220d401,75D302ED4DF2,"In this paper i have mostly talked about my beleifs, but everyone has their own beleifs and I know that we can not fully prove there is life on other planets, but whatever makes you strive fo answers be my guest. I am not here to judge you or shoot down your answers. I am here to give you once again another concept. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+013043d9717a,75D73C6EA19B,Having a driverless car would be like having a toilet that wipes for you. It is another item that someone has created for people to be lazy. A driverless car would be useful for some people like handicapped people or people who can not mentally be responsible to drive. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7fd263943144,75D73C6EA19B,Driverless cars could potentially help but often after time machines have been proved to fail or later experience problems. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8ed28c018451,75D73C6EA19B,"""Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless."" (paragraph 2)
+
+""Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and NIssan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020."" (paragraph 10) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c6fed722bf3d,75D73C6EA19B,With the thought and hope to succeed in the completely driverless car the goal would be to reduce the amount of car crashes and provide safer transportation. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c908f2f47bf0,75D73C6EA19B,"The driverless car could reduce the cost needed for vehicles and their needed repairs, they would be mostly robotic, and could reduce gas and gas prices causing chemicals in the air to be reduced. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eff3554d13a4,75D73C6EA19B,The expected cost of a driverless car would be very pricey as the radar cost two hundred million dollars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+757c2f3e09c5,75D73C6EA19B,"""Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars."" (paragraph 6) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9828694b4b3,75D73C6EA19B,"With all the new technology and new inventions of technology it is harming the world. It is causing health issues, social and economic issues, and riots. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c6c2298e92b9,75D73C6EA19B,"More than half of the entire world is obese, the number of obese citizens is growing larger and larger. The use of technology plays a very large role in obesity. Young children and people of all ages for that fact grow addicted to social media, video games, and many other things. The use of cell phones, which many people can not go anywhere without, harms the brain and kills the cells in your brain along with exposing your body to unneeded radiation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ab2b72ca277,75D73C6EA19B,Technology has helped the world in many ways but is hurting it in many more ways ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d304ae0d094d,75D73C6EA19B,Even though the driverless car could reduce the amount of harmful checmicals in the air it could increase the amount of radiation exposed to humans and other living things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33ce9dfbcd39,75D73C6EA19B,"Technology should be used to benefit everyone even those against it. Society, manufacturers, inventors, they should all be using techonology to improve the world and improve the health instead of creating things that harm potentially or could cause more lazy citizens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d39d61978ffc,75D73C6EA19B,Driverless cars is a good idea but it is not something that could help the enviroment or the world to much. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ddf016e865d3,75D73C6EA19B,The idea of a driverless car is something to get more money out of people and to sell a product. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a36f3cc7e660,75D73C6EA19B,Most people drive safely without the help of computers. If someone were to care more to better help or train drivers then there could be many more people driving safely and preventing more wrecks. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed22daf3f939,75D73C6EA19B,Many states also feel that there are safe enough drivers that they outlawed the testing of driverless vehicles. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0757af55c6ee,75D73C6EA19B,"""Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driver cars."" (paragraph 9) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56dce5ccbe29,75D73C6EA19B,Using the computerized vehicle could do more harm to the users and the enviroment unknowingly. More wrecks could be prevented but with more care and time to help drivers more wrecks could be prevented. If the driverless car would break down most people wouldn't know how to fix it resulting in another entire vehicle to be purchased. Laws would need to be changed along with many other things. Not to mention insurance would most likely sky rocket. People who purchase and use a driverless vehicle may potentially be harming their lives decreasing the years they will be living. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f1ff83e0cc27,75DD90F67191,"In 1976, a Mars Global Surveyor snapped pictures of what is known as the ""Face on Mars."" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e1e9e9ef66eb,75DD90F67191,It is a natural landformation and is visible ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f045e14f044e,75DD90F67191,becuase of the pictures shown ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08f2c23bafd2,75DD90F67191,the internet ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc040096b202,75DD90F67191,and the area the landform is located ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec1397e0d6cb,75DD90F67191,"First, the pictures show the ""face."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e0582b0b6a0,75DD90F67191,"In 1976, the pixels were 43m (meters) per pixel. In 2001, the pixels were only 1.56m per pixel. The quality is worse the bigger the pixels.
+
+In 2001, the quality of the pixels were clear enough to show that the ""face"" was only a lanform. In the picture of 1976, it is visible that the picture is blurry. In the picture of 1998, the picture is less blurry, but still hard to see. In the 2001 picturer, the picture is very visible and well seen. At the bottom of the mesa, it is also visible to see the lanform has a rounded, smooth, almost non man-made surface that buried the landform into the planet side. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+568b2b9c7df2,75DD90F67191,"Next, the Internet, showed what the scientists and the picters showed. A landform. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3e9d5bb10c6,75DD90F67191,"In the text, it states that when the picture was taken in 1998, it was the cloudy time of theyear on the red planet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+adb96e078e87,75DD90F67191,"Finally, where the ""face"" is located. The face is located in a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+404df8e13bd4,75DD90F67191,"In the article, it states that ""The sensation was short lived. Scientists figured it was another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah."" Although the NASA researchers have concluded the ""face"" to be a natural landform, many are not satisfied with it.
+
+Many people claim that it was built by aliens, however, pictures do not lie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+240b6beb8fb1,75DD90F67191,"In conclusion, the ""Face on Mars"" is really a mystery. Many think it is a natural landform while others think that it was built for a reason by aliens. The ""Face on Mars"" is a natural landformation becuase of the pictures presented, the Internet, and the location on the landform.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e985f7cec4e,75E9D43EB9E4,"My position on driverless cars is, that they wont be as safe as cars driven by humans. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3aa5731c3558,75E9D43EB9E4,they wouldnt know when to stop ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb28f601d351,75E9D43EB9E4,they might go out of control ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c282be3a682,75E9D43EB9E4,they wouldnt be very surportive during deflict stiutions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d26783872f8,75E9D43EB9E4,i believe they wouldnt know when to stop because they might be road block and they wouldnt be able to identify the objects. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89b728000306,75E9D43EB9E4,"Examples from the passage are, the cars will probably have a hard time navigating through work zones and around accidents. The cars will also have to deal with complicated traffic issues , such as navigating through roadworks or roadblocks that lie ahead for the autonomous car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96fae58641b4,75E9D43EB9E4,they might go out of control. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19984dcf8bdd,75E9D43EB9E4,The car might face some technical deflicties and someone will most likely get injured. If some dies get injured who will be at fault? wil it be the driver or the manufacturer. I believe it will be the manufacturer because they made the car and they didnt make sure if it was safe for the people to drive arounfd in or not. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+509268a9802b,75E9D43EB9E4,They wouldnt be as surportive during deflict stiutions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aed20a0f63c9,75E9D43EB9E4,"i think They wouldnt be very surportive because the car might not know what to do. For example, if there was roadblock and the car didnt or couldnt indenify them and the car crushes. What if the car was told to go somewhere and went to wrong way? will it be the cars fault. And if the car got broken down for no reason during traffic will it be okay for other people. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b31a8266e16,75E9D43EB9E4,"i believ that driverless cars wont be as safe as cars driven by humans. i believe this because they wouldnt know when to stop, they might go out of control, and they wouldnt be very surportive during deflict stiutions.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+082fae970b30,75EDF0FEA5F1,"The electoral college is not a place, but a process. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bd5adc1dabc5,75EDF0FEA5F1,"A process that seems meaningless, a process that is uncalled for. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+5d679453066b,75EDF0FEA5F1,"It doesn't make any sense to me because i thought when someone votes, their vote goes straight to the person running. to learn that, that is not the case at all is really an eye-opener about how much politics confuse me. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad85f240fc2e,75EDF0FEA5F1,"You help choose your state's electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candiddate's electors.
+
+Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on Abolishing the electoral college! They are not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency.
+
+Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century, the system allows for much worse.
+
+Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.(So that a popular vote for kennedy.) In the same vein, ""faithless"" electors ocasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.
+
+At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have nochance of winning. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters Ohio, they have yet to make it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12edcf60ee5c,75EDF0FEA5F1,"Pretty much anywhere you go whether it's school or work, you will hear that as an American Citizen, you have the right to vote. If you don't vote for the president of your choice, you can't complain when things go wrong ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b96a80dab26,75EDF0FEA5F1,Yet your vote really doesn't count unless the electors you voted for win ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56e3d90afc83,761B16CEE6C1,"Keeping the electoral eollege method shouldn't be appropriate for electing the next president. In source two it says that when you use the electoral college system and you vote,not only do you vote not only for one person but other people pledged to that person. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+089b785c3302,761B16CEE6C1,"I don't think it's the best idea to choose this method despite it being a more simple process but using the popular vote method sounds more fair,source two also says that someone won the popular vote but the electoral college prevented him from becoming the next president ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c1611d0248f6,761B16CEE6C1,electoral college causes too much confusion ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aafad5bf4f34,761B16CEE6C1,its unfair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3557995a2c7d,761B16CEE6C1,caused more problems with voting. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ccd0e9eb87f,761B16CEE6C1,"Although,using the elctoral college method is more simple,it can cause a lot of confusion ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3fd70defd3b,761B16CEE6C1,If you vote for one person then you automatically vote for the other people pledged to that person. Many people who have ran for persident have lost due to the electoral college method but they've won the popular vote. Its possible that when you are voting you don't know who else you're voting for. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e729d2f10bf9,761B16CEE6C1,"To continue with,the electoral college method can be unfair ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c83e78b7eba,761B16CEE6C1,"because of the people who lost due to the system. Some people that ran for president won the popular vote but lost the electoral college vote. Others also lost because of the ""winner-take-all"" system,it awards every elector to the winning presidential candidate. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a31ee4955e3f,761B16CEE6C1,This method has caused problems with voting because of it being unfair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+210bf0a8007c,761B16CEE6C1,Some of the problems its caused was how others win automatically if the president they pledged to won the electoral college vote. This method of voting has to go. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+556a7fd6483d,761B16CEE6C1,"In conclusion,the electoral college voting system shouldn't be used again in the future becasue of its confusion. It can have you voting for someone pledged to the preisdent that you didn't wan to vote for. It can also be unfair. Many people lost because of this method but won the popular vote. Last it's caused too much problems as a voting system in general.                          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fc58abf783a1,76537E8BFF12,"I have recently been learning about the electoral college. i have been learning alot about it, actually, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e3603eaaa9c4,76537E8BFF12,"i have to say. the electoral college sounds like a really bad idea! 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+667c3aef2356,76537E8BFF12,"First off, swing states? that sounds completely unfair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dba6593d1a71,76537E8BFF12,"its good for states like Texas, California, and New york. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+54f78109434a,76537E8BFF12,"but what of the smaller states like Montana, or Maine, or Wyoming even? they deserve as much of a voice as the others. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c82c0847a924,76537E8BFF12,"this is presidency here, not what game we should play in Gym! majority vote makes absolutely NO sense whatsoever. I mean come on, we are deciding the next LEADER of our country! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+edf4640f39b2,76537E8BFF12,Again. everyones wishes should be accounted for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e5995d60a5b,76537E8BFF12,Now im not saying that popular vote is perfect either ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+61522d23d504,76537E8BFF12,but it sure beats the college. there are too many variables for the college. too many areas where something can go wrong. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8fb183c6f368,76537E8BFF12,If something gets tied then they just throw the vote to the house of represenitives. I think if there is a tie that it should result in a re-election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4de57bc3ccf,76537E8BFF12,Well thats really all I have to say. I hope you read this letter and maybe you can send it to your superiors or whoever it is you work for to get my letter read by the President. And see if we can fix this problem here. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a78a5bc87af5,765A364BDA2E,"Some students learn better in an enviroment that's more quiet and a place where they feel safe such as their own home. Doing school from home is not for everyone, alot of students do homeschooling because they don't like school or if they dont feel as if they are safe and sometimes it's just too distracting for them so they make the decision to do school from home. Everyone learns differenty, it just matters how you apply yourself in your schoolwork and how you work. Many students struggle in school because they are worried about their grades and there is a lot of distractions that keep them from doing work sometimes. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+39e157a5a82c,765A364BDA2E,"Not everyone can do homeschooling, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+27b7e05b670e,765A364BDA2E,some students need to interact with other people for them to work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae888efc1fe0,765A364BDA2E,others are fine with working by themselves in a quiet area. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bcabd0e20f8,765A364BDA2E,Online school and homeschooling are just other options for students that want to learn in a space where they feel comfortable or if it's more convenient. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c9ea003c1a7,765A364BDA2E,"Many of us students struggle in school, it's hard trying to keep grades up with also trying to keep a social life and any other problems that come our way. When the idea of school pops up into a students mind, it can be seen as annoying. When you have the privilage to do your work on your own time makes the student feel more calm and not worried about when a projects due or if they did their homework. Everyone is different some students may benefit from homeschooling or online school, and some may not, every student is going to learn differently. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5aaa62118de7,765A364BDA2E,As a student myself I choose to go to school instead of doing homeschool. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc0069ffb705,765A364BDA2E,I personally learn better in an enviroment with other people and teachers that can help me along the way. There are many different and affective ways of homeschooling. I beleive that having an actual teacher with me helps students better succeed in a class or activity. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cca3cd275b5,765A364BDA2E,Some people may not agree with that statement ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+01f57a4864f3,765A364BDA2E,"but, that is their oppinion. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+785ba9a7b2c7,765A364BDA2E,"Everyone has their reasons why and how they choose thier education. School is a very important asset in life, it is better to be educated in a space where you learn the best, rather that be at school, at home, or online. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb3bd5ff5a74,765A364BDA2E,"Homeschooling is a good source of eduaction, but I think that a school eduaction from a public or private school is better than doing it from home or online. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+295287e8f344,765A364BDA2E,"Some students may learn better in a space such as their own home but, they may not get all of their work done and sometimes may never even do their work. When you dont do your work your grades start to drop and when they drop it can be hard to get them back up again. With homeschooling or online school it's different. Online school you dont have a teacher with you at all times helping you with your work or telling you what you missed or are missing. Responsibility comes into play when you are doing your school work and with online school you are responsible for all your work and when you do it. When you are going to school everyday there is a time when you do it and when you turn it in, in most cases you can find a teacher to help you out with your work when needed, you can't really get that with online school. One time when I didnt know what to do for an english project, I had to go to my english teacher and ask him how to write the paper, and he sat down with me and told me how to write a good paper, he didnt tell me what to write but he told me how to wite it. Some students may not get that with homeschooling. With homeschooling students may have a teacher there with them, which is great but sometimes they might be to comfortable since its at their own home and students may start to slack off. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7545a344f96d,765A364BDA2E,"The way students apply themselves is all that matters, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e4b3729e8d1,765A364BDA2E,"if a student does not do their work and pushes it off for later that's not applying yourself to your best ability. School is easy if you just try and pay attention. You have to want to pass and want to do good for you to succeed in school. Everyone thinks differently and it might take a little bit more time for other students. All that matters is the way you comprehend work and what kind of a space you work best in. If you work better in a silent space where its just you and your schoolwork then homeschooling is for you but, if you work better with other people then school is better. The way a student learns is very imporatant to the decision of homeschooling or school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a97a593a5dd1,765A364BDA2E,"Homeschooling is a very benificial way to get educated, you just got to figure out if it suits you best. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ce6ad159047e,765F4BB0381E,Dear Senator: I'am writing you this letter to inform you that I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. Why? ,Position,Effective,,,
+b15f2fcaeb95,765F4BB0381E,"Because this progress is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+307ea2f612e5,765F4BB0381E,"A dispute over the out come of an Electoral College vote is possible, it happened in 2000. All of this reasons are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b1207285a8e,765F4BB0381E,The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8aee2992983,765F4BB0381E,It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. In Electoral College the electors are the one who elect the president not the people and my opinion is that its a good idea because not everyone has the same opinion. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e03cdf10e18,765F4BB0381E,"The meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. This process consists of 538 electors. The amount of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the President. The district of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of The Electoral College. Each candidate that is running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0be793c7c567,765F4BB0381E,It is necessary to have this groups so you can be the president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d49740d94de0,765F4BB0381E,Well Senator I hope you like this letter and feel sure why you have to keep the Electoral College. I know you would keep it because you are a good Senator and you want the best for everyone in the state. Remember that this is very important for the people who think that you should keep this very important process that has grow in all state of the United States of America.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b1edbebb52b2,7672B22A2D8F,"Well, I think all the students from fifth grade and up should take on the responsibility of doing community service for their school ",Position,Effective,,,
+9f7a3a5ca6b3,7672B22A2D8F,"I strongly feel that if you are in a good community that you've been in for a while, you should at least take your time and pay the community back somehow. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bddb9f44820b,7672B22A2D8F,"For example, letting the children do recycling for their classrooms, or just staying after school for an hour and helping out with a sports team. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+79ca7a08ec0c,7672B22A2D8F,Students will at least take a day out of the week to participate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8066a1e8cc9,7672B22A2D8F,"If some of the students contemplate about doing their responsibility to the community, let them choose a day out of the week to go and volunteer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a8d6e05d09d,7672B22A2D8F,"For the other students that don't play any sports or do any other activities, they would have the advantage of volunteering more at the school.
+
+In return to their participation, they could receive at least five extra points added to their lowest test grade of a class which they choose.
+
+No candy or toys will be given, because we would want the children to learn that you can make a difference without getting in return.
+
+With the five extra points, the students will volunteer, more because they wanted to. And the fact the cannot play with the five points, such as, the toys or candy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+54850ae0678c,7672B22A2D8F,"I honestly think by doing community service, it will prepare the students for more and harder things ahead of time, or it might just even give them a good feeling inside themselves. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1314354fb972,7672B22A2D8F,"I know when I do my community service, I feel proud out myself for making the world a better place one step at a time. Whether it's doing recycling, or helping a younger child with studying. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab2fa6b98aad,7672B22A2D8F,Each thing has its own benefit and purpose. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+aaf2f513e991,76764A83DA39,I do not believe it is right that you should change the grade average to participate in sports. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9a7837283b5a,76764A83DA39,ability ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3108a8653ae2,76764A83DA39,responsibility ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+999d8842031c,76764A83DA39,because of academic ability ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ead1deaeb09d,76764A83DA39,"I do not think that athletes should be punished for not being able to achieve what is considered by some academic greatness. To maintain a b average is hard when you have practise, chores, and many other things to do. Not to mention the fact you have been at school all day. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87286e84f319,76764A83DA39,My next option is that kids should be able to do what they want after school is over. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+32245eafbe92,76764A83DA39,"If we have to spend eight hours a day five days a week here on top of homework ,chores ,and whatever else comes up we should not be made to have a b average to do something we love and want to do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c94d9f1927d8,76764A83DA39,we should have to have the responsibility to hold ourselves accountable for our grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+834236d0e856,76764A83DA39,"we shouldn't be held to that by other people and their threats. We should be the ones to care for our grade ,and if it gets too low we should take responsibility and take ourselves out of sports. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fefe396d275f,769FAE6984B9,Has the face on mars been put there by alien? Well statments say that aliens have came and put this face on mars. Dont believe this because its slightly untrue because if you believe that aliens are real then of course your going to believe that aliens have came and put this face on mars. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8cae4b826d7c,769FAE6984B9,In my opinion aliens arent real and they didnt put this face on mars why cant people do research just to figure out if aliens are capable of doing these things. I honestly dont think that aliens would do this. just because i actually dont believe that they are real. So thats why im here to change anyones opinion about this face on mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a583ed6d320,769FAE6984B9,If it were aliens couldnt there have been some type of markings somewhere some how because if you think about it aliens can leave tracks too so if there wernt any trackings on the seen then aliens couldnt have done it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9b38be660b8,769FAE6984B9,So with that being siad there were no aliens there to put this face on mars i mean for you to think that it was aliens wouldnt you have to have proof that it was aliens or some evidence. Anything to prove that it was aliens but for now we can only say that it wasnt aliens who do this because no one has no proof. That it was aliens no signs no tracks no nothing. So it couldnt have been aliens. This is how you know that it wasnt aliens who did this ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50d5e23bf78f,769FAE6984B9,it is a natrual landform that is just there not one put it there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d936db0db3ab,769FAE6984B9,Has the face on mars been put there by alien? Well statments say that aliens have came and put this face on mars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+64afa8f99c2e,769FAE6984B9,Dont believe this because its slightly untrue because if you believe that aliens are real then of course your going to believe that aliens have came and put this face on mars. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d09f08c62536,769FAE6984B9,In my opinion aliens arent real and they didnt put this face on mars why cant people do research just to figure out if aliens are capable of doing these things. I honestly dont think that aliens would do this. just because i actually dont believe that they are real. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e81a4f86ca72,769FAE6984B9,So thats why im here to change anyones opinion about this face on mars. If it were aliens couldnt there have been some type of markings somewhere some how because if you think about it aliens can leave tracks too so if there wernt any trackings on the seen then aliens couldnt have done it. So with that being siad there were no aliens there to put this face on mars i mean for you to think that it was aliens wouldnt you have to have proof that it was aliens or some evidence. Anything to prove that it was aliens but for now we can only say that it wasnt aliens who do this because no one has no proof. That it was aliens no signs no tracks no nothing. So it couldnt have been aliens. This is how you know that it wasnt aliens who did this it is a natrual landform that is just there not one put it there. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+29d901b5e8cd,76A03B929C4B,"With the information that has been found there's no prove that the Face has been structured by aliens. Scientist have stated that the Face was form by natural causes, others say that they may have found more information about the Face but than what they are saying. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ed82effd2312,76A03B929C4B,The Face was made by natural landform not created by aliens. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8e956bff50ea,76A03B929C4B,The face wasn't stuctured by aliens so therefore was made by natural landform. NASA has plenty of evidence that the Face was form naturally ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+92c54bdf78d5,76A03B929C4B,", for example that it hasn't really been discovered that aliens actually exsist. Throught the years of 1976 and 2001 there were pictures of the face not yet comepletely form so therefore scientist think it took 25 years to form comepletely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f27e5bce8f6e,76A03B929C4B,Others may say that NASA has more information than what they are telling us. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f475936e2ad7,76A03B929C4B,"For instants in the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars,"" in paragraph 5 it states that ""evidence that NASA would rather hide."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+29b1cd6d675b,76A03B929C4B,I argue that the Face wasn't created by aliens but from natural landforms. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+683ff73a9069,76A03B929C4B,"Natural landforms, created by aliens no one will actually really know what they think. I think it was naturally formed not created by aliens there really is no real evidence about it created by aliens. There could be thousand possibilites that it was form naturally or created by aliens. There are plenty reasons to believe that it was natural causes but not as much as it being created by aliens, after all who doesn't love a good mystery. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d83abb5a7224,76D57BCC7A10,"community service should not be required in school, ",Position,Effective,,,
+59b4a93c2c35,76D57BCC7A10,"this is because some people who do not have a lot of time on their hands would go crazy trying to perhaps juggle school projects, homework, out of school jobs that take up most of their day. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b2a681eac64,76D57BCC7A10,So tell me how all of our students who do all of these things and then would have to put community service on top of that i think not Mr. principal sir. that is just wrong. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+41979a42fe3d,76D57BCC7A10,Now for someone who never does their school work does not have a job and just sits around on their lazy butts all day long those are the people that should be doing community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9ece01ae9c08,76D57BCC7A10,"not the people that work as hard as they possibly can all day and barley have their eight hours of rest shouldn't be doing it the ""other guys should"". ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+398f0f38ba38,76D57BCC7A10,"So what I am thinking is to go to every teacher in the building and see what students work there hardest and what students don't and try to see who have after school jobs and who doesn't. and the people who do not work hard all day every day they should be the students doing community service not the hard working students. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7ef97e94ab5d,76D946F75D6A,You should go with policy number one because students should have time to use their cell phones during school but not during class time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ca5b25221ead,76D946F75D6A,The reason why not during class time is because no one will pay attention to you when you are teaching because they will be texting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+840f3cf86399,76D946F75D6A,They should use it during their free time because what is the use having a cell phone if you can't use it during school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd3b6a977788,76D946F75D6A,I don't have a cell phone because there is no room on the plan for me right now because I have five sisters and four brothers. In my school you are aloud to bring your cell phones but you can't use it at all in school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7bc30ec9ffcd,76D946F75D6A,People who has a cell phone shouldn't use it when they have to study because that is just waste of time and you will get bad grades. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15bca39fd35d,771C8CAD2E80,"Helping the community is very important, and I'm sure many people think that. There are many citizens that volunteer for community services such as picking up litter, tutoring children, helping in soup kitchens, etc. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+62968e409d5f,771C8CAD2E80,"As important as community service is, I do not believe it should be mandatory ",Position,Effective,,,
+4158fad2aa4f,771C8CAD2E80,"Many students have other extra curricular activities, and jobs in or out of the house they must participate in. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c1a6334d9e21,771C8CAD2E80,"Therefore, I'm sure these students don't have the time after school to do community service. If those kids had to do community service, it would most likely add stress to their lives and give them less time to do homework, so their grades could begin to slip. On the weekends is when kids relax and have fun with their friends and family, so it wouldn't be a good idea to make community service time on the weekend. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e9d2c134a3ce,771C8CAD2E80,"But, if you really think it's a good idea that kids help their community, maybe in some classrooms, teachers could put a donation box ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c7a087714ae,771C8CAD2E80,"where kids could donate money to a local organization. The class with the most donations can win a pizza party, or a trip somewhere - maybe a trip to the organizations headquarters to see how everything works? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e509abdde2f0,771FA4E3B7A8,To state senator i'm argue is that we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6d4518edb3da,771FA4E3B7A8,because it's a place where we vote on President and Vice President ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+666163b9b810,771FA4E3B7A8,and the place where we count the votes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3db89fa8e7b8,771FA4E3B7A8,and the Electioral College process consists of the selection of the electors. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+52d0e308a5a6,771FA4E3B7A8,because it's in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress. And election of All the soon President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9765ac803945,771FA4E3B7A8,is because a majority of 270 electoral vote is required to elect the President. And when we vote for our candidate we are actually voting for your candidate's electors. And each of the candidate running for President in our state has his or her own group of electors ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6406bd178a97,771FA4E3B7A8,and that is my thrid reason is because were states's entitled allotment of electors equal the number of members in it's congressional delegation:and one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for you senators ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f7a0bc5ee0d,771FA4E3B7A8,And this are all my three reasons why we should keep the Electoral College.         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3d58a11483a3,7748D6B51DD8,"whats the point in voting if our vote may not even count?
+
+In the Electoral college people citizens vote for a slate of electors who then later go and vote for president. However, sometimes it doesnt work that way. The electors are not obligated to choose the president that the people want. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b4c7b3f249dd,7748D6B51DD8,The Electoral college is corrupt and needs to go away. ,Position,Effective,,,
+5115b9b37151,7748D6B51DD8,The people of America dont like the Electoral college and want something new. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+527ff568d52a,7748D6B51DD8,"Stated in source 2, "" Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanksto the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent off voters would prefer a dirt election to the kind we have now."" In short, people were so unhappy with the election and the way it ended. people would rather have direct voting than to continure with an Electoral college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+94c109f926cd,7748D6B51DD8,The Electors in the Electoral college arnt always innocent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af609f89bbd2,7748D6B51DD8,"They can lie, cheat, they go behind the backs of the states citizens and not  even vote for who the citizens want. In 1960, segregationists in the lousiana legislature tried to get rid of the democratic electors. They wanted to replace them with people who would oppose John F Kennedy. Sourse 2, number 11 says ""In some vein, faithless electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whoever they please..."" This means that with an Electoral college, the person you want to vote for may not even get picked cause of lying electors. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e67f13f50fab,7748D6B51DD8,"Even though the electoral college is a pretty bad thing, there are still a few upsides. The Electoral college avoids te problem of neither candidates getting a majority of the votes. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4659abdbb867,7748D6B51DD8,"In sourse 3, number 22 (There is no pressure for run-offelections when no candidatewins a a majorityof the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the electoral college, which invarable produces a clear winner...) Simply this says that without the electoral college voting can be difficult and stressful. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f423474e3925,7748D6B51DD8,"In conclusion, The Electoral college may not be the best thing for our society, and also can we even trust that our votes even matter? either the Electoral college cant be trusted and it needs to be gone for good, or something needs to change.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+822d59eb0f50,7752756F8C62,"I, one hundred percent agree with the creation that was approached. By the way they explain the technology and advancement in the project it sounds legit, I mean it does have its flaws and improvement But the flaws isn't anything bad, Its just certain area on the rode you have to help more. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7c008085bf7c,7752756F8C62,I think its an wonderfuk idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd37c88340b8,7752756F8C62,The way they say it assist you is very helpful for the elderly. Some people are handicape and was waiting for an idea like this. Everybody isn't able to move around and do alot of things because they are disabled but a invention like this will change all of those problems. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7b5368af34e,7752756F8C62,The main reason is it will help the commuinty ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b17c019e9e17,7752756F8C62,maybe the robbery rate will go down because alot of people wouldn't have to walk anywhere for them to get ran up on an rob or worse murdered. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+823427bfde30,776FBF88E6FF,Welll its going to be ah good beefit but in the same time it's a bad benefit to doing class in the house . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+08478c5a17c5,776FBF88E6FF,The oportunity the not miss one class and be in you house is the best thing the can happen to one school students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f036f6ca3da2,776FBF88E6FF,"this benefist the school and the students beacuse they never going to miss one day of school and the homeworks and tests to. In the actually some kids miss the school for be sicks, some familiar pass away ,they in vacation and they not return in time to the country , they miss the bus school and they can't go to the school beacuse they not have car ,oh they wake up late. This is a benefit because they can learn about the class oh activity and not miss homework oh test and be prepare for the next class in the school, and be in his house relaxing and be in a safe place and always have ready you homework oh test to next class and its ah good benefits to the people ho its in the hospital and can go to the school for ah broken legh oh medical condition . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1e91d184c52,776FBF88E6FF,But not everething it's good about this idea some kids maybe oh actually they gonna stop going to the school and stay in his house and skiping the school. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+478e901defd2,776FBF88E6FF,"this its going to affect them beacuse they can't sociable with other people ,they can have ah computer oh in his house, they not have wife oh cellfone and other guys oh kids will skip the online class to and go play video games,and they parents are not gonna have idea about what his kid did oh do, and during the test they can copy using this class peapers oh using his fone to find out the answers. ( In my case i will always if they give me the opportunity to online classes i will always stay in my house relaxing in my bed when i listening the class ) but in the end this option of learn in his house have his good and bad bennefits (some school in the united states are not using this becuse they not have personal wedsites and can garanteed if the student are going to use this ) . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+908859659134,776FBF88E6FF,"In my opinion its ah good offer becouse sometimes i miss the school bus and i can't go to the school becuse i not have ah car and i always miss the class,homework and tests, and this can be help me a lot to have all the work in time and be prepare for the next day of school and be ready take the class oh to take one test . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2408fb2d00c,776FBF88E6FF,"In the intere world some kids can have this oportunity to have online classes in some countries around the world they not have the tecnology to do that so if they miss the school one its like they are missing one day of his life and fact even they are kids ho not are going to the school bacuse the parents not have money to send them to the school ( yep in some countries the education cost money and they not have free schools like united states ) and they have to work in one short age to help his family in my country was like this thaks to good i was alow to go to the school thanks to my mother and come her to the united states so when i come to the school her in united states and i hear students said i hate the school and i wanna be in home i remember my country and i said thanks to this country for give me free education (even in her they do video school conferencing to the people ho not coming to the school and i said wow , Even they do that for the students, and the students are doing protest to have more off days so what i try to said is always thanks to you parents for the education they are give to you and thaks always to you country to give you free education to you can be some one in you future and have a nice work and never ask why i not have this. and always think some in around the world not have the stuff the you have and always thanks to GOD for the stuff you have ( I always do that wen i wake up). 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d484a2baae65,777E8CA790B3,"Imagine the following scenario: you wake up in the morning and there is two feet of snow on the ground. You turn on the television and your local news station reports that your school is closed today, so rather than spending a wasteful snow day doing nothing and having to make up seat time later in the year, you log onto your computer and connect with your teachers and classmates via video chat. In many schools in the United States, this situation is quite common. As technology becomes readily available to more and more people, some schools offer the option for students to learn without being at school by way of the Internet. Those who oppose online school argue that technology is harmful to learning and that the best learning environment is the classroom. While it is ideal that the student be in the classroom, sometimes technology is helpful when the student cannot physically attend class ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a1943e924147,777E8CA790B3,It is imperative that people abandon their old fashioned ideas about technology and school and recognize the benefits that online school may provide. Distance learning and online school would benefit students and schools ,Position,Effective,,,
+f24ed5b6f8c7,777E8CA790B3,because severe weather days would not be wasteful ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fa2684da0a0,777E8CA790B3,students with health conditions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c478fecc2e87,777E8CA790B3,responsibilities at home would be able to attend class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e622db5bf14,777E8CA790B3,"Distance learning is a viable option for students so that when school is cancelled, the missed day is not a complete waste, especially in regions that are succeptable to severe weather. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8869f13b21bc,777E8CA790B3,"Teachers usually set lesson plans and assessment dates far in advance, but when weather interferes, their entire schedule is thrown off and their plans have to be pushed back. When school is canceled for more than a few days, holidays become regular school days, and sometimes students have to attend extra days in the summer to make up for the lost seat time. Furthermore, sometimes driving buses after a severe weather event can be hazardous due to debris or ice lingering on roadways, even once school is back in session. Online school eliminates these issues with school wide cancellations because the student can simply attend classes at home no matter the weather. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d19cbd5016f,777E8CA790B3,"Online school may benefit students that have conditions preventing them from coming to school. For instance, a student may have health conditions ",Claim,Effective,,,
+186dba0f5f07,777E8CA790B3,"that keep them at home or even in the hospital, and that includes mental health conditions as well. Some students may have a disease or disorder so debilitating that they cannot get out of bed some mornings. These afflictions may be long-term and may keep them bedridden or even in the hospital. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+26de853da3bb,777E8CA790B3,"Many childrens' hospitals have school-like systems already in place and communications with a patient's school so that no one falls behind in their studies while they receive treatment, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+26e4292353b9,777E8CA790B3,but most times that is not enough. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+10304d04f867,777E8CA790B3,"Additionally, students that come from less fortunate backgrounds may have duties at home to perform, like caring for family members or working to make money for the family ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bddaf4bbc9f8,777E8CA790B3,"Some schools recognize the responsibilities a student may have at home and supply them their papers and materials, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+96023e33cb23,777E8CA790B3,"but then again, very few offer that type of compassion. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a44cf4892594,777E8CA790B3,"While the student receives the school materials they need, they do not get to participate in discussion or attend lectures that help to solidify the information. But with distance learning, the student is able to participate in class online while they cannot be physically present. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+76bd0f899c02,777E8CA790B3,"It is proven that students show the most success when they are present in the classroom, but that success is not limited to being physically present. Technology is the solution to wasteful missed school days caused by severe weather, health, and home conditions. Students can get around the things that hinder them from achieving success in school by attending classes online. Of course, the goal of every institution is to make sure that their students receive the information they need for their future so they thrive, so it is absurd that anyone would put down the idea of online school. In fact, technology connects people to one another. The world is constantly growing and changing in terms of technology, so why should our schools be any different?  ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7480ca7dce6e,77947A3CBF0F,"I think that allowing students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are off or on silent during class time is a great idea ",Position,Adequate,,,
+16085c267830,77947A3CBF0F,because use kids be in school for a long time and sometimes we do get bored and off task ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12f9e6cee4f7,77947A3CBF0F,but if we had our cell phone to living it up it would be much better as long as we can still come to class and get our work done. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ea0d3662417,77947A3CBF0F,"But i also may think that its a bad idea because if more kids are being allowed to bring their cell phones to school that might cause more bullying and problems like phones getting lost, stole, broken and possibly taking when in class because students mite for get to turn it on silent or off before classes. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+be641a221a00,77947A3CBF0F,It also may be a very good idea because some penents don't allow their kids to take their cell phone to school because it is not allowed with in the building but if the children are allowed to use the phone with in some periods of the day. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+475da28899f5,77947A3CBF0F,The perents will allow the kids to bring the phone to the school. So that the kids that walk to school can feel safe and protected. so that if something goes wrong like someone trying to take the child they can feel safe cause they will have their phone and the perents wont have to worry about if their child got to school safe or not. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+49dc480fa0d5,77947A3CBF0F,S yes i think that it is a good and bad idea for the kids to bring their phone to school. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1c163d27c5d2,77E61AB52214,Are electoral college better than other colleges. yes i belive that a electoral college is better than other collages ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e9edce27dc4f,77E61AB52214,they help pick the preiden andthe vice presidentg based on votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+93a3d1af70f2,77E61AB52214,the Electoral collage is consists on 538 votes whicha majority of 270 elecors is required to elect the president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe1ffef326ac,77E61AB52214,An electoral college is a collage that helps pick canididates that are running for president in are state. the canidates are chosen by the politial party. the election is held every 4 years on thethe first tuesday of november. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bee9e06862ac,77E61AB52214,my second reason electoral collages help are state out are they help pick they rights states to vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+68378ea68f42,77E61AB52214,an electoral collage tells there president where to go and give there speechs. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+71c690f2ed25,77E61AB52214,"presidebts seechs are very important, the speechs give them vote two keep them president in charge. some on thebig voteing states are texas,california,and florida, 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+910719e71f04,77E61AB52214,so inconclusion you should go two a electoral collage becuase they help are states out by pick the right president and keeping him. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fbec4f3476bc,77E95471DE20,Is being home school a efficient way of learning or is it an excuse for sleeping in more? Would it be more beneficial to have school online? Most student don't come to school nowadays and they rather stay home and not doing anything. The numbers of student attending school have decrease by a enormous amount. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+89c5074910d1,77E95471DE20,Have an online school/classes would beneficial to many students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e108eacedc3a,77E95471DE20,Have school provide online classes can help a lot of student who don't want to wake up in the morning. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a03a8310bb49,77E95471DE20,Most students and teachers have to wake up really early just to do to school. While some don't have to wake up early. If school had online course then students and teachers don't have to wake up early and worried if they are late. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e374aaad4222,77E95471DE20,Another reason why school have online course is that it would reduce the amount of paper. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f0bb1037e7c,77E95471DE20,Most teachers tell their students to recycle their paper if they don't need it anymore. Most of the student will not hear or ignore what the teacher had said and they throw the paper away into the trash bin. One of the positive reason would be that more trees would be save and the usage of paper would reduce ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53b970ccfad4,77E95471DE20,"Beside that reason ,it would make grading a lot more easier for teacher by having the online course do the grading for them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2aff578770aa,77E95471DE20,The amount of work the teacher would have would decrease rapidly for them. Make them have more time to plan for the next class or have more time for them self. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ddc3cd9dd08,77E95471DE20,Sometime using technology can be a bad thing as well. Many of the thing we do at school can help us in the real world. One of the thing that school help us with is social skills. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4b1a44d2857f,77E95471DE20,"When people use their electronics they are not interacting with other by face to face. Which reduce the social interaction with other people. School is environment that help student build up their skill so when it time to pick a collage or it time to have a job ,they will know what to do and they don't have to get nervous or anxious about how their interview was or if they got in to the collage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2abe5818d001,77E95471DE20,Another reason why school help is that some student many not have the money to own an electronic or many have really bad connection to the internet. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c240ca20dfbd,77E95471DE20,"In school, student don't have to worried about not having an electronic or if they have bad internet. The school can provide a students with paper so they can do their work at school and at home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b42613ba3a94,77E95471DE20,The third reason is the student not doing the program at all. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0a2e2df47938,77E95471DE20,"Most student will do the program ,but there will always be student who don't do the program. It nature that there will be some students that won't do the program at all ,but that is the chose of the student if they don't want their education. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99f8a47120dd,77E95471DE20,"The chose on have online course can go both way ,it depend on the on problem if most student and teacher complain about wake up to early and not having enough time to get every ready. In my opinion it depend on the situation the school is having ,if it the only way to have to have student to do their work and get everything done then go for it. There is no good or bad option for this. It's all on the situation on hand. Both thing have there goods and there bad ,but it is up for these school departments to know if it will help the student or make it worse than it was already. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+19e56e982dfd,77E95471DE20,"In conclusion ,it would be beneficial for the school if they had online course for the student but sometime can't be a good thing. It depend on the situation the school is having. If it the only option to have online course then go for it ,but if their is there no problem at the school then let the student go to school and build up their skills for real life situation in case they don't know what to do. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2abb8a7f5143,780B302C5523,Do you think driverless cars are a good idea? Yes or No? Driverless cars can have positive effects and negative effects. The cars could change the world or they could not end well. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+224ceb95533a,780B302C5523,Driverless cars are not a good idea at all. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+21980d520fdb,780B302C5523,"The reason is, because the cars really are not fully driverless. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+667f4450e900,780B302C5523,"if you are in a constrution zone or near an accident the car has you take over. The car isn't full capable of handling driving in a situation like that. The car lets the driver know when they should take over. So the question is "" If the car is driverless how come you have to take over in certain situations""? Why can't the car handle it all on its own since the car is smart? For the driverless cars to be very smart they need a bunch of sensors.
+
+My postion on driverless cars is I think they are a bad idea. They can't fully handle all situations. Also if the person behind the wheel is drunk or worse and they come upon a bad accident "" What will they do""? "" How will they act""? Since the car can't handle itself and the driver is incoherent I dont think the ending result will be very good at all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e01831e13c3c,780B302C5523,"the driver of the car must stay alert at all times and be ready to take over if needed. If there is an accident or the wiring or technology fails in the car.
+
+"" Who is blamed""? ""Do you blame the driver or the maufacturer""? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc588a0a4ff0,780B302C5523,"Even though the traffic laws would be changed, according to the driverless cars there would be new laws put in to cover liability in a situation if there was an accident. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2a8d6d5ae0c,780B302C5523,"Do you think driverless cars are a good idea? Yes or No? Driverless cars are not a good idea at all. My position on driverless cars is I think they are a bad idea. First off, the driver must stay alert at all times and be ready to take over if needed.                 ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+59ba95b8bf30,7811A36C87ED,I thing that no matter what student need to do they should help out in cleaning the world because it is out good to live in a nasty world. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5078095a2d6,7811A36C87ED,Many student around the world will always go out side and clean up if they have stuff to do they just wait and do it later they will rather clean up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+48ded225a80d,7811A36C87ED,If you want to live in a clean invirment then you will support me with this problem that I want to fix. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78c1728477f3,7811A36C87ED,Like there are some places where they don't care how it looks around them and it doesn't look really good. If we could fix this by just say it to go away it would be cool but we cant we have to do something about it. And the solution is to get a group from every student from every school and clean up the nasty thing from the world. And if the student in the school have to do any thing they can wait and get done another time in the time when they finish the work they had to do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ab4648a3269,7811A36C87ED,Maybe the teachers and principals can help do some cleaning up to cause the student cant do al the work. And if they could that is not fair if they do cause they need to do some of they other stuff like practise for a sport or some thing that they need to get better at ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60952802b39f,7811A36C87ED,So let get out and do the work and leave the world the cleanest posable cause i know that we can we have done better thing before. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f7e44d4f6d89,7820048B53C8,You are changing school policy so student that have a C average can not participate in sports or other activities unless the students have at least a B average ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+58f3b43a57f7,7820048B53C8,I think that students that have a C average should at least have an extra class that they need help in so they can pull up their grades up so the students can participate in sports or activities. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3abf85638668,7820048B53C8,If the teachers of the student think that they are working hard to bring their grades up at least the principal should give the students 30 minutes of free time on the activities or sports they want to participate in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cba2a6e6b10b,7820048B53C8,The school should make a contract saying that students that have a C average cant participate in sports or activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0d25a4e38b5,7820048B53C8,"The parents ,teacher ,principal ,and the student should sign the contract .The students that don't even try to work hard to get a B average should stay an hour after school to catch up the work they have been missing. the students that don't recognized that what their doing is wrong and they don't get privileges like other students do ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df27e5d91aed,7863164BA896,"In the American Public School system, education is primarily compromised of students physically attending their school and learning from teachers in person. However, with the rise of technology and the internet in the 21st century, students at most public schools are able to participate in learning both online and via video conferences, allowing them to effectively be educated from home. Distance learning in this way permits students to work on school subjects, even when away due being ill in some manner, and allows students with mental health disorders unable to attend classes the opportunity to achieve the same as someone attending school physically. Additionally, students working a job outside of school to support their family/self now have the opportunity to attend school from home/work and still be able to provide financial support to dependents/themselves. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a5479beb536a,7863164BA896,"In short, distance learning is beneficial to students in public schools for students missing school ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9e8e0fad3b0c,7863164BA896,due to sickness ,Claim,Effective,,,
+819bf3793228,7863164BA896,mental health issues ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b189b253e8d5,7863164BA896,careers clashing with school scheduling. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f2ed8067809d,7863164BA896,The first and likely most prominent way in which students benefit from distance learning is the case in which they miss school for an extended period of time due to illness. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4205924ceb92,7863164BA896,"Distance learning allows these absent students to still work on school subjects and stay on top of their work, while also reducing the risk of other students receiving the same illness due to the student continuing to attend school. Students attending school while still sick is a prominent issue in public schooling, caused by the lack of support for students unable to attend school. This issue would be eliminated due to the reduced need for sick students to continue attending school due to distance learning allowing students to stay at home while continuing to work on school subjects. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b7b78b0ece69,7863164BA896,"Another benefit for students from distance learning is the ability for mentally ill students unable to attend school due to disorders such as social anxiety, Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder, and depression to continue learning outside of an environment detrimental to their mental health. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fc918bc488d,7863164BA896,"Speaking from personal experience with family members and friends with mental disorders, public schools can often be a breeding ground for self doubt, anxiety, and general depression to occur for mentally unstable people, regardless of counseling opportunities available. Working on school subjects would allow for mentally unstable students to pursue their education, while also allowing them to maintain a healthy mindset in the comfort of their own home away from mentally unhealthy stimuli. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c01c68aa51ba,7863164BA896,A final example of the benefits of distance schooling for public school students would be the opportunity for students working job/s outside of school to simultaneously pursue an education and support themselves or their dependents. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b423f816d043,7863164BA896,"Many lower class students or students with parents unable to work feel the need to obtain jobs outside of school, ranging from part-time summer jobs to full-time year-round jobs that inhibit the ability to pursue an education. Distance learning allows these students to do both at the same time if they have the desire to do so, instead of having to go to a program such as night school in order to catch up on work they usually do not have time to do. Distance learning essentially unlocks the ability for students working outside of school to continue to pursue academics while also maintaining financial balance for themselves or others. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7729e4ff42c2,7863164BA896,"To sum up, the opportunities for students with work hours interfering with school, mental health disorders or various illnesses are all benefits for the usage of distance learning within the American school system. Although some find distance learning to only further complicate the process of education for students due to some not having reliable access to WiFi or internet, different accommodations are usually available locally for students to use distance learning as a tool to further their education. Distance learning serves as a universal golden opportunity for students unable to attend school to continue to receive and education regardless of outside circumstances. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+30cc58288a0c,786C86C9ACFE,"I have recently been informed about wanting to make certain changes to the election process. I am not of an age to vote, yet I am informed about how the election process works and the role the electorial college plays withing it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9889fad99d28,786C86C9ACFE,"The electoral college is a proces, not a place, which consists of 538 electors. During this process the public casts their vote for their favorite candidate. The votes are added up in each state and whichever candidate has got the most votes is for whom the state's representatives will vote towards. Each state's number of representatives is determined acoording to polpulation with California having the most electorial votes at 55. Electors can change their votes for whomever they'd like, yet it is highly unlikeley. In order for a candidate to win an election he or she must obtain 270 votes out of 538. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd3702abbe3b,786C86C9ACFE,"Some may argue that the people's votes don't necessarily influence the outcome of the election since electors can still change for whom they vote for, so they request that the popular vote  determine who becomes president. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+01ee236a9d78,786C86C9ACFE,"This idea implies that all eligible citizens in the U.S.  to vote in the election when truth being over half of the nationwide population does not cast a vote, with the leading cause being apathy. Also it is implied that all citizens are informed about who they  vote for. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+eb2de6e06833,786C86C9ACFE,"During a presidential campaign, a political party will put most of their efforts in ""swing states"", these are the states with the most electors. This means that people from smaller states will recieve little or no information about the candidates causing the citizens to cast a blind vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb589528a4f0,786C86C9ACFE,The main reason of why the electorial campaign should determine who wins instead of the popular vote is the public can be too easily influenced ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8fd381fb52f,786C86C9ACFE,"If a particular candidate is preferred in certain areas, the population in or around that area might be influenced to vote for that individual. Also people can be peer-pressured into voting for someone they might not agree with. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aedb2a1fa520,786C86C9ACFE,In my opinion the U.S. population is not ready for that kind of responsability ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+02adb859ab10,786C86C9ACFE,The electoral college was established to help the election proces run smoothly and it has worked for decades without any major flukes or flaws. So why change now? ,Position,Effective,,,
+2d12598a4076,7879F32BC3FF,I want to change the election by popular votes instead of the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+350567b46357,7879F32BC3FF,"because even if the president gets popular votes, it wouldn't matter anyway. They will have to vote the president by using the Electoral College. It wouldn't be fair because ""Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate."" That means if the president gets the most popular votes, it won't matter. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b0f69e9d1dfe,7879F32BC3FF,"Back then, presidents wouldn't accept the Electoral College. ""What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college!"" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+260be973f276,7879F32BC3FF,They all thought that it wouldn't be fair if the popular votes wouldn't count and the Electoral College has its defenders. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01eaad448c27,7879F32BC3FF,"The thing that's wrong with the Electoral College is because ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccfd4fc467ee,7879F32BC3FF,"So if someone were to vote for a president, they would be voting for a slate of the 34 Democratic electors. After that, they pledged it on the president that they voted for. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc9dc72e4e0a,7879F32BC3FF,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters."" It's because of the winner-take-all system that happens also on each state. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+32a39b5b9d80,7879F32BC3FF,"So candidates think they know they aren't going to win and never spend time on other states as well. People also think that the Electoral College is unfair because they never get to see the candidates and they won't know who they're going to vote. People only relied on Bob Dole. His goal was to ""Abolish the electoral college!"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a0233573110,7879F32BC3FF,"When people also vote for a presdential canidate they actually vote for the slate of electors. Which was why Gore had more popular votes than Bush, yet he had fewer electoral votes. But there is one way to settle a dispute of the outcome of an Electoral College vote. ""it happened in 2000-but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote."" The Electoral College also has a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal but has enough electoral votes to vote for president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a4d83f21522,7879F32BC3FF,So now we all know how the Electoral College is unfair. Because of the constant votes that don't matter at all yet they always make sure to vote that president and all of the popular votes wouldn't matter. That's why I want to change to popular votes than the Electoral College does. All we need to do is work together to over come the Electoral College so the votes can be fair and we would want to vote for the president that we want.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e7b2a71544ee,78D5951B96C5,"Some students believe that we should have community service some disagree. I am about show why some disagree and some agree. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a44d79320211,78D5951B96C5,Many think that it is good to help the community butt also we should be worrying about our grades and less then our community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3b5157e08c2,78D5951B96C5,I don't think u want to be leading a school of failing students. These students can do this on their own time ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+058fe2672881,78D5951B96C5,I disagree on having to be forced to do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4702af400f29,78D5951B96C5,"I believe that this job should be given to litter bugs. That have been doing the littering. Yea every once in a while if u see a piece of trash pick it up, butt to be forced is not the correct thing to do to students. We the students did not do any thing to be punished . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8af83d8fcf49,78D5951B96C5,I mean im sure I proved myself correct about having to be forced to do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fc0e5fb518ba,7903205CD088,I think that having cell phones at lunch periods and at other free times such as locker break would be better in ways ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a7a58743356a,7903205CD088,"students could communicate with other class mates with work needed to be done and needs help reviewing, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+29ff4b65ce44,7903205CD088,having cell phones at school could tempt other students to text or call their parents to pick them up for early dismissal or a feign sickness. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c2ff1a989b33,7903205CD088,Having cell phones at school would be crucial to school functioning ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f309a1c5563a,7903205CD088,"students would abuse the rule and do unneeded things at school such as ""sexting"" sending hurtful messages through other people to start a rumor. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81c106ad2e0a,7903205CD088,"
+Some people might get in fights and grades would probably decrease ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9408e1f17397,7903205CD088,"because people would be obsessed with texting. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3971ab565f0f,7903205CD088,"In a worst case scenario the school could get sued by a student getting a white slip, detention, ISS, suspended, or expelled and disagree about doing the wrong thing they did or if they where given it through ""hard feelings"" between a teacher and a student. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+76878c9fcf23,7903205CD088,I think students should be aloud to have cell phones at school but not be able to use them during school hours and have them off or have the home room teacher take them up each day and hold them until the end of school or dismissal. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8e3692c2bc90,7927FA99C0AD,"If I were to choose between keeping the electoral college or abolishing it, I would chose for abolishing it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8cc4c7aacf61,7927FA99C0AD,The electoral college has a system that can be considered confusing to most americans ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb60769ce0f0,7927FA99C0AD,This system indirectly transfers citizen's votes to congress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0741f8d6d269,7927FA99C0AD,This allows for loopholes and sabaotage to be commited during the process of electing a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c25bdfec86b,7927FA99C0AD,I propose abolishing the electoral college and replacing it with a simpler system that appeals to all united states citizens instead of just certain citizens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1675ce7acef,7927FA99C0AD,"Based on phrases in the passage, there is evidence that the electoral college system is corrupt. An example would be:
+
+Back in 1960. segregationalists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in relpacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.)
+
+-source 2, second paragraph.
+
+This is stating that in 1960 people who opposed Kennedy nearly became his electors. So if they succeeded in becoming his electors his votes would have gone to another opposing candidate. This could not happen with a system of voting that directly conected everyones votes with congress. This was a clear case of sabotage in the election of 1960. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cc681b4950f,7927FA99C0AD,Votes in larger states and smaller states are balanced out so the number of votes would not be based on the number of people in the states. This can be seen as a way to make sure that state votes did not compare to the population of said states ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e87ec3b14103,7927FA99C0AD,In reality it is limiting the votes of citizens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f4e0d46598cf,7927FA99C0AD,"If people ignored how larger states had more people than smaller states and just thought of everyone as individuals everyone would have a say. The system I am proposing does not view states as the voters, but every american citizen as one. After everyone passed their votes, they would all be tallied and which ever candidate had the most votes would win. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9f48f0f389f,7927FA99C0AD,"You may think that the votes could be sabotaged, and that politicians could put in fake votes and get rid of real ones. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+003bf859481a,7927FA99C0AD,This problem could be dealt with by maximized security. There would be videocameras wherever the votes could be swaped. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+799e41f4b229,7927FA99C0AD,"I propose this system to ensure that every citizen has a vote, and that corruption while transitioning the votes would be eliminated. This would be a less confusing system that could make voting more efficient.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f2a599e3eec3,793379D7FAE6,I would like to discuss a policy about cell phones that I heard you were considering. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b3c94de43b37,793379D7FAE6,"I personally think that policy 1, the one when kids are allowed to bring cell phones to school and use them during lunch and free periods but must be turned off during class, is the right one. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+68bc9f2247a5,793379D7FAE6,"One reason why I think that this policy is the right one is because kids should have cell phones.
+
+It's a great way to communicate with your friends and family. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+86d704aac457,793379D7FAE6,"But if you are going to install this rule, there must be some limits. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+762eeaba3fa5,793379D7FAE6,"Kids should turn their cell phones off during class because it could distract the teacher, the class, and the person him/herself. If a teacher sees a kid playing with a cell phone or if it goes off in class, the teacher should take it away. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f845ce23bd94,793379D7FAE6,But another good reason to have cell phones is if the school has a fire or another emergency. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e23a562841e,793379D7FAE6,Kids could easily get in touch with their parents to let the know that they are all right. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05e1ef22d52c,793379D7FAE6,"Also, another thing not a lot of people think about that could be good or bad is homework. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54a2c2d0e452,793379D7FAE6,"Kids could text each other to find out what the homework is if they don't have it, but they could also send texts or pictures of the answers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6190ad50113a,793379D7FAE6,"A reason that I would question about: what about teachers?
+
+Would teachers be allowed to have their phones out whenever they wanted?
+
+Or can they only have them out if they have some free time?
+
+This is all something that could impact the education of the kids, but I'll let you decide that one. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4f2b84615ed,793379D7FAE6,One more reason kids would love to have their cell phones in school is that they can take pictures of their friends in school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e5d04cc13cf,793379D7FAE6,if there was an unforgettable moment or something like a cool memory to capture. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f4fef1b5f09,793379D7FAE6,"There are numerous reasons good or bad to install the rule about cell phones, but I hope that you will consider this letter in your deciding. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+96e047154244,7942E0DE4B51,I think that the Electoral College is important becase it is  a process. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+78f8df1715a7,7942E0DE4B51,"The founding fathers established the Eletoral College to the Constitution as a comromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualificatied citizens. The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors.
+
+The meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President. The counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The electoral College consists of 538 electors. The mjority of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the President.
+
+Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District  of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word ''state'' also refers to the District of Columbia.
+
+The presidential elction is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in
+
+November. One thing that I didn't know is that most states have a ""winner-take-all.""A ""winner-take-all"" is a system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7900649e129,795558799D7A,with all do respect I want to tell you why you shouldn't require all students to perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+4012f480fa5e,795558799D7A,"First of all I think its not necessary because some people are doing it already ,and the ones that are not they have a reason not to be doing it! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+67ac3e5112d5,795558799D7A,"I know it is something important for everybody to do ,but it is also important for you to understand that some people just don't have the time or just don't want to do it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d3bf260a159,795558799D7A,I have some friends that are too busy to be doing community service because they have jobs or are taking care of siblings. Please do not require us to do it there are many people that don't want to . ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+062873ba517a,795558799D7A,"Secondly I don't think many people do it, especially all the trouble makers . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c901361d45e9,795558799D7A,"They are the kids who really don't want to do it ,and that means more meetings with you .Now I know you really don't want to deal with that ,so why bother do the requirement . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97b4c4753b90,79766A7A3911,"In the first photo it looks like it is a human face but when it goes to the second photo it look sbasically like nothing. Maybe just like a cloud but nothing really then when it goes to the last photo it looks like it is a hard object but it has cracks in it. In the story it says "" Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars."" it says that something funny happened. It did not happen on purpose so we do not know if it was an alien or another creature. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a6fae94a832d,79766A7A3911,They thought that it was a Martin mesa but it was common for that to happen around Cydonia. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd612e5c4791,79766A7A3911,"The ""Face"" had an unusal shadow on it like it was made to look like an Egyptian Pharoh. It only loooked like that in the first photo not the second or third. When NASA took photos of the face and put them on the internet everyone basically freaked out because they thought it was a sign for alien life. It could be but there can be many other reasons why it looks like a face. They say that it could be just a natural landform but many people like to think that ""oh it is not it is a sign of alien life"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c716c77ab1af,79766A7A3911,"The caption on the photo when they posted it on the internet was ""Huge rock formation...Which resembles a human head... formed by sadow giving illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a92f5f54fcd,79766A7A3911,That was a go getter for attention it looks like they just want to get attention so they can scare people like a lot of people do. It was a good way to engage the public but it was also a bad way of getting their attention. It was bad because a lot of people can get scared because of something they hear and this story did not seem really believeable. A lot of people will believe anything they see on the internet it bacisally does not matter on what it is about they will just believe it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dba5c8951906,79766A7A3911,"""The Face on Mars"" had became a pop icon it was on Hollywood films, in books, magazines, and radio talk shows ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+046c5c0895b2,79766A7A3911,"Also in the story it says ""It once haunted a grocery store check out line for 25 years."". That is just crazy that peope will believe things like that ! Sometimes people just want to scare other people and tell them lies about anything. Some people think that the face is ""bona fide"" evidence of life on Mars. People say that NASA wants to hide every reason from them so they do not find out anything. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+342498832fee,79766A7A3911,They just want to say conspiracy theorists and not tell the truth ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+056c71f23e6d,79766A7A3911,That could be true but in this case I do not think so ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3c611daa088a,79766A7A3911,"The people on NASA's side the denfenders of NASA thinks that NASA's budget wish that there was ancient civilaztion on Mars. If NASA tells people everything about ""The Face"" then people will just spend all their time getting worried about it and want more reasons on why that it is there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f48e12afd761,79766A7A3911,"Sometimes things like ""The Face"" can pop up and people just would not know how it happened and why it did happen ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db4dc2ed0d5f,79766A7A3911,"They thought that the photo just was not sharp enough to see it cleary. It showed that it just was a natural landform and there was no sign of an alien monument.
+
+It was just a cloudly time of the year and the camera caught the wind blowing and the haze got in front of the photo. They went back on a cloudless summer day to see if they can get a better photo then before to see what it was.
+
+It showed that it was a Martain equivelent of a butte or mesa. Landforms are common around the American West. It showed that it was a lava dome that takes a form of an isloted mesa about the same height as the face on Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b59c6ed6adc4,79766A7A3911,It was never a sign that aliens were on Mars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+204f62490740,79766A7A3911,aliens could be on Mars and we would of never knew but they took a photo on the wrong night so they had to go back and see it again ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+97db0ab6b912,79766A7A3911,The whole alien story was very unbelieveable to me but people will believe in anything. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+77878b7d4644,798A81F6D572,I think that students should perform a community service because it would make our community stronger and bring us closer together in the things we do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+24612ea90539,798A81F6D572,Some things we could do are cleaning up liter and making our Earth healthier. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+31d107b8fa96,798A81F6D572,"Also we can throw our garbage away instead of throwing it in the streets or on the sidewalk and if we see a person do it, we could tell them to pick it up and throw it out or we can throw it out for them if they don't throw it away. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b795ac6f76c,798A81F6D572,"Another thing is our community can make a garden and plant vegetables, trees, flowers and other things ",Claim,Effective,,,
+86ef72a0893f,798A81F6D572,We can do that for helping families in need and we can actually help them too ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39c1d2e6ab1a,798A81F6D572,"we could recycle our paper, cans, and cell phones or ink cartages. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a11a94f49dea,798A81F6D572,"If everyone recycles, our Earth would be a lot cleaner and we wouldn't have to worry about having a dirty Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68935be145ef,798A81F6D572,Our community can also donate to homeless families and families that live in shelters and that would need things for their family or themselves. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7769ba4df148,798A81F6D572,"We can give them things like, clothes, toys, food, make up, blankets/sheets and other things a person would need. Everyone needs someone to take care of them and look out for them and they always will need someone there. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1a48d49e5fa5,798A81F6D572,The community we live in could be a lot stronger and healthier if we all just try together. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+451c1ab9857a,79B23EC7E834,Some say community service is a waste of time. Some disagree. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6385e1cab08e,79B23EC7E834,i Believe that students shouldn't be required to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cde8dc9cd2b7,79B23EC7E834,I feel most should do community service and that it is better for the earth ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6e4229dbd910,79B23EC7E834,but it should be their choice not someone else's. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0571852800dc,79B23EC7E834,It helps stop waste and pollution. It is safer for the world and its people. Without pollution the world and humans can go on living healthy lives and lifestyles. Not taking care of the world is not taking care of ourselves. The world could end as we know it because of pollution. It isn't safe. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+01d8228993c7,79B23EC7E834,"Also, community service teaches valuable skills and lessons that one may need later on in life. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b914f8fa19f,79B23EC7E834,"It teaches how to clean up after yourself and after others, how NOT to litter, and respect towards others. If we do not learn this earlier in life we won't have the knowledge and care to do it later in life. Teaching this lesson about community service to children could cause a chain reaction. They could teach their friends the lesson, and they could even teach their children in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a91c2674c9e,79B23EC7E834,Another reason community service is important is because it gets children out of the house and doing something active. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8c50ca334c66,79B23EC7E834,"Most students spend their time playing video games, or on the computer, or even watching television, and soon enough, it will become daily activities possibly for the rest of their lives. Kids can break away from the electronics and be outside getting fresh air in their systems. They could even meet new friends. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18ecc65baac7,79B23EC7E834,Just like a recipe. You can choose whether to put certain ingredients in the food you are making. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+932bc4142fe6,79B23EC7E834,"I think community service is a great idea, but not all may agree. Although it may stop pollution, teach life lessons, and break them away from brainwashing electronics, they should be able to make their own choices. Therefore, i feel doing community service should be optional. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+65c94a93ce30,79C245E3C9C2,"To begin with, the electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president abd vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The electoral college consist of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Each candidate running for presisent in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen bt the candidate's political party ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a8e8d4de2898,79C245E3C9C2,"In addition, the presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in november. You can help choose tour state's electors when you vote for predident.  Most states have a ''winner-take-all'' system however, Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of ''proportional representation.'' Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for president, but for a slate of electors, who in tuen elect the president ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b662c9954c78,79C245E3C9C2,The single best argument aganist the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f06c9726bda5,79C245E3C9C2,It's like a hurricane for a presidental election ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6798fa208b68,79C245E3C9C2,Prehaps the most worring is the prospect of a tie in thre electoral vot. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4c221ed3680,79C245E3C9C2,"In that case, the election would be thrown to the house of representatives, where state delegations vote on the president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e83cd71f650,79C245E3C9C2,"To futher inform, at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffc490d79a92,79C245E3C9C2,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spen time in states because they no they have no chance of winning. it's like convincing pigs to vote for you. It's offical the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+706dbb466e85,79C245E3C9C2,It's hard to say this but Bob Doloe was right abolish the electoeal college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f76a6e7b616,79C245E3C9C2,The electoral college restores some of the weight in the politiccal balance that lage states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the consition. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9b0e235a5066,79C245E3C9C2,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7564b2d60c5e,79C245E3C9C2,It can be argued that he electoral college method of slecting for the presisent may turn off potential voters for a candidate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6fd3594284ee,79C245E3C9C2,But athat single vote may decide that election!               ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0fdfc2e31932,7A2D0B189298,"The Electoral College needs to be disbanded. There are many reasons why the Electoral college needs to be stopped, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+afafec4062f6,7A2D0B189298,"How is it fair to Americans, if you say we have a vote that counts when we are just voting for a slate of people that might vote for someone we do not want. The voting process needs to be handled by the people, and who we want to run this country that we live in. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b67d70d08673,7A2D0B189298,The voting process is just not fair to Americans. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80c1295c90fc,7A2D0B189298,"It's in the constitution that we have a right to vote and that we have the right to choose our president, but you people in the electoral college take away that right when we only get to vote for a slate of people. If elections were done by popular vote things might have been different in many ways. First off, in the 2000 election if it was done by popular vote, Bush would not have won and we would have had, Al Gore as president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbe3173f7cb8,7A2D0B189298,"The electoral college is just uncompletely fair to voters. Because, in some states they have a winner-take-all system, so the presidental candidates to spend time in those states to get their vote.  ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+165feb9e25c6,7A2D0B189298,"Seventeen States did not see the presidental candidates at all in 2000 campaign, so what is the point in having voting in those states if we dont know who we are voting for and why we are voting for them? There is not a reason to vote when the electoral college votes fore us. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9dd069a53b0d,7A2D0B189298,"Yes, sometimes people do not know what they are voting for and why, but that is because we have no say, it is not up to the people who is going to the president of the country of we live, because the electoral college will not let us choose who we want. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+49f643e34df2,7A2D0B189298,"Many people, very important people, such as Jimmy Carter, Richard Nixon, and the U.S Chamber of commerece have agreed that we should abolish the Electoral College and give the people the vote and see who wins president then. If the people had a vote  on who is president it would be very simplier, than the Electoral College when they have a tie, we would not have to bounce the decision, we could radomly choose one state and let them vote to see who the president is for 4 years. Yes, some may agrue that randomly choosing one state would somehow turn out to but a massive mistake, but there is a way to make sure that no state gets selected 2 times before the first time of any other state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af75f669e28c,7A2D0B189298,"Many my agrue that, the Electoral college is there for our benefit. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+27127e3b9c9e,7A2D0B189298,"Tell me one benefit there is to having no vote as regular citizen. I get it that there are more people in some states than others, but that does not mean we all get the same number of electoral votes as the huge states such as, California, Florida, and Texas. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7eff9f3cf36d,7A2D0B189298,"So if we are not going to have the same votes number of votes no matter what why does it matter if we give the people the option and have them vote for who they want, it is because the Electoral College does not care who we want they choose the president on who they want. Also, if it is up to the Electoral College then why does it matter if the citizens vote, I mean of course we want to give our input of who we want, but it does not matter, because our state senators will go behind our back and vote for someone we do not want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e5f6c9fa012,7A2D0B189298,"America, of course, has many more freedoms than other countries and we are not taking advantage of that, because we can not allow the people to vote for the President of the United States. The citizens do not want to vote for a slate of people, they want to vote for our president. So let me ask you as my Senator, what are you going to do about it?    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+50edbd6c5b7c,7A40839A44E2,I'm not for driverles cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1282db19cbf8,7A40839A44E2,they can still cause an accident ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f963211f319d,7A40839A44E2,there not really driving the car itself ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+69e9b7bad725,7A40839A44E2,"is helping out the driver by stop when they are not looking or if there is a green light then, the car will alert the driver to press the gas if they are distacted. But, it will not drive a person home if they are drunk ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fabb93279bd3,7A40839A44E2,There are better ideas then making a driving car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1fd2fe01edb,7A40839A44E2,instead of buidling drivierless cars we can save the enviroment. They can make the world a better places but make fuel efficeny cars instead of driverless cars. Make trucks not run on diesel we can be doing so much more than making a driverless car. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c522e1f6a7e,7A40839A44E2,What if the car computer programming chip is damage then that means that the car can't be able to work correctly and that the car is in a higher risk of getting more people in danger because of the driverlesss car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce6aab8e8d75,7A40839A44E2,Building a driverles car is going to be very expensive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38935efefb8a,7A40839A44E2,we are not in a lot of debt so we should use are money wisely.    ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+96104599e1f8,7AC66E0CFAAA,I argue in the favor of keeping the electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e7315b55b0bf,7AC66E0CFAAA,"I think that it really doesn't matter what a single person vote can do. One vote will not make a difference. The state uses the americans vote, to see what we would pefer. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ab9c1f07ac4,7AC66E0CFAAA,"Every vote an
+
+‘
+
+important
+
+' person makes, it counts that.
+
+I personally think its a waist of time to vote,that us americans really have no say so in. I bet that if we all didn't vote this next go around, we would still have a president. All because, of what the
+
+‘
+
+important
+
+' people want. All 538 electors know who is better for the United States of America. So, why we vote? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b118ea10316,7AC66E0CFAAA,"The only thing against the electoral college, is what we might call the
+
+Disaster Factor. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+049a71a68214,7AC66E0CFAAA,"Back, in 1960, segregationist, in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with the new electors who would oppese John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.)
+
+The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism. a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be {overruled} by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing the the electoral college method id not democratic in a modern sense. It is the electors who elect the president. NOT the people. When you cote for a presidential candidate you're actaully voting for a slate of electos. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+533186802a85,7AC66E0CFAAA,"So, you might as well just let the electoral collge do the job. I mean if you want to go and vote mor power to you. But, like I said its a waist of time to do so!!! ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+71a916ad44f2,7AD34830967B,""" What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college! Well i think otherwise. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1b45b65c4cac,7AD34830967B,the election of the President is by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a6c4cae0974,7AD34830967B,"The start of the Electoral College is well handingly choosing the electors, which consists of 538 electors each of course must be qualified. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4f96eb8155e,7AD34830967B,"Most of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. The number of members in its Congressional delegation is equal to the entitled allotment of electors in your state, one is for each member in the house of Representatives plus two for the Senators. For the purposes of Electoral College, Columbia District is allowed 3 electors and is treat like a state. and when i say ""state"" for this topic i mean the District of Columbia. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b0ed1b66a40,7AD34830967B,"A outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, just look back at the year 2000 it was less likely then a come over the popular vote the Reason for that is the winning candidate's share of the Electioral College expanded his share of the popular vote. For example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c96ed835ae86,7AD34830967B,each and every step of the Electoral college method comes out to be a well handed system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95430773891a,7AD34830967B,Its more then enough fairness included when choosing the Presisent and Vice President. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c1f4fcb7f81,7AD34830967B,"Popular vote is more based on ""winner-take-all"" System thats awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate, unlike the Electoral College which is a process that consists of choosing the electors, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eab7ff74ead9,7B1981581BC7,"Presidential elections provides the United States of America with an opprotunity of unification. The process of choosing the next leader of the United States always brings the people of the country together knowing that all of them play a role in the election. This is present in the popular vote, a vote consisting of the general population. However, the popular vote is not always accurate, as anyone of any background can vote as long as they hold proper citzenship. The electoral college on the other hand, is a process that serves as a compromise between Congress and the rest of America. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d1c042f6b15a,7B1981581BC7,"The fact of the matter is, the electoral college is beneficial to the presidential election ",Position,Adequate,,,
+299e9625798c,7B1981581BC7,because it unifies Congress and the people of America ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8c762ee265db,7B1981581BC7,"is part of the country's roots. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0097872a7768,7B1981581BC7,"To begin with, the electoral college, more than anything, unifies the people. The electors were once, as everyone in the nation is, an average citizen. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8e8ba8271490,7B1981581BC7,"According to Bradford Plumer the electors chosen, ""...depend on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves."" On top of that Bradford indentifies the electors as, ""...anyone not holding a public office."". Bradford Plumer illustrates better than anyone that the electors chosen are average citizens who think the same as the rest of the general population while still keeping in mind that Congress must also be represented. Knowing this, the working-class people of America, and Congress can rest easy knowing that the electoral college process will make the decision that is best for the nation as a whole. This decision making, whether directly or indirectly, unifies the country. In 2012 more than three-fourths of the nation tuned in to watch the presidential election; in the end being one of the most watched televised elections in the country's history. This number includes Congressmen. This shows that the decision making process of the electoral college brings all the people of the nation together to decide on the choosing of the coutries next leader. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dfef21c5ca2f,7B1981581BC7,"The general population, though average citizens, are somtimes not as qualified as Congress to make unbiased, beneficial decisions on behalf of the rest of the country. However, knowing that the next President could be a part of Congress, sometimes sways the decision in favor of a particular candidate. In this paradox of the qualification of Congress and the average citizen, the electoral college is used to fill the void. The electoral college has been used since the founding of the country. The founding fathers of America (George Washington, Ben Franklin, John Adams, Thomas Jefferson, James Madison, etc.)must have developed the electoral college process for some reason. According to the Office of the Federal Register, ""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" More than anything the electoral college is a mutual and nuetral process that represents something inbetween the biased politics of Congress and the average citizen. The average working class person is the greatest example of American integrity. This person shows that in this great nation, if you set a goal and are willing to work to acheive that goal, it can be acheived. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3f227fe15cd4,7B1981581BC7,Why strip this moral that has represented the United States of America since its first years? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d1537bd9c0d,7B1981581BC7,"While there have been a few flaws in the electoral college throughout history, this decision making process still unifies the people of America and is still, most importantly, part of its roots. More than anything, the electoral college process represents the two sides of the country: Congress and the average working class citizen. So, rest easy knowing that the next election, there is a process between Congress and average working citizens that works to make the decision that is best for the people of this great nation, the United States of America. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7ff2c6b55f46,7B5D27D241EA,In my opinion i think that all students shouldn't have to participate in community service ,Position,Effective,,,
+fc91ba261764,7B5D27D241EA,"because some kids have important things that they have to do, not want to do, have to do ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0858bdca4ce6,7B5D27D241EA,"For example what if a student had siblings that were younger than they were and couldn't take care of themselves, so their older siblings would have to take care of them. Then the student couldn't take care of their community service hours. Another is what if a student participated in sports and had an important game to go to. That means that they couldn't finish their hours as well. Another example is what if students had a big test to study for and it was worth half of their grade, then they would have to study instead of community service. That also means that another student could not fulfil their community service hours. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d8c7e7228d29,7B5D27D241EA,"It's not just three or six students that could not fulfil their hours. The whole class would have to study for the test and more that six students have younger siblings that they have to take care of and finally, more that six students participate in sports or other extra curricular activities which means that all of those students could not perform their given community service hours. Since they could not perform their given hours then they would have to face the consequences even though it wasn't the students faults. They had more important things they had to do, not want to do, had to do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6c166094175c,7B5D27D241EA,If they did something bad to get in school suspension or out of school suspension then they should have to perform community service ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+225f74b025c6,7B5D27D241EA,but not without and independent reason ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6483cc198c13,7B5D27D241EA,That is my position on whether or not the students of the school district should have to perform community service or not. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5f926dc20943,7B64BC831CD9,you should not change the letter grade from a c to a b ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d951589eebf2,7B64BC831CD9,then only the few people will play sports ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+578374d26ded,7B64BC831CD9,not be able to do our best in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7c6b1c5c2048,7B64BC831CD9,Because we would be focused upon joining sports losing focus in the class room and causing a decline in academic learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+95295cf66bbc,7B64BC831CD9,"if most of the school has a c average them most of the school will not be able to join sports and many students would complain and there would be more problems with the children in the school. such as sharp increase in suspensions, more kids on or in trouble, etc.... this is a way kids rebel inaddition the grade point average that is the most common or that most have is the one used for sports. also since most people trying to get good grades causes them not to pay attention so the would be students who join sports and then if there grade drops then they would quit having to get a b is hard nearly perfect work on projects. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83687e531e6b,7B64BC831CD9,the kids that usually join sports are not the super smart kid but usually average students and usually don't upsead a c on projects ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c811c2b71de4,7B64BC831CD9,that means the teams are going to be very very small 1-9 kid on most of the teams meaning most of those kids will be picked on from frustration of other kids not joining the sport since the c average is the ideal grade for joining sports the grade is not perfect but its the average grade for the entire school then that grade should be used not causing a big slur. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ddf2cb80f90e,7B64BC831CD9,those are only a few of the reason's that we should leave the grade to join sports at a c not at a b sincerely STUDENT_NAME ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+41df1c053713,7B9A897C5297,"In today's world, technology is everywhere. Technology helps assist in everyday tasks and brings about new levels of creativity. In this new age of innovation, smart cars fit right in with all other aspects of our digitalized lives. Not only could driverless cars help in many other ways regular cars can't, but they also allow for an increase in safety potential. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a05ef98b715b,7B9A897C5297,"Overall, driverless cars will be beneficial for the modern world. ",Position,Effective,,,
+99d26673a477,7B9A897C5297,The use of driverless cars can vary from ecofriendly transportation to customization for individual scheduals. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9cde641a10c7,7B9A897C5297,"By using driverless cars as a taxi system, gas consumption would majorly decrease. The taxi system idea could also lead to new ways of public transportation. These cars could take their passengers anywhere they needed to go through a direct route. Passengers would no longer have to wait for long periods of time on buses for their stops. These driverless systems would allow for greater flexibility overall. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+17686f205817,7B9A897C5297,Driverless cars would also help communities everywhere with safety. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5beec2357ed9,7B9A897C5297,"Since these smart cars are loaded with sensor technology, they can help limit the amount of crashes that were regularly happening. The protypes of driverless cars have gone millions of miles without crashes and could help stunt the commonality of vehicular crashes and deaths. Driverless cars could also aide with the safety for learning and elderly drivers. Oftentimes, teenage drivers and drivers with slow reaction times are the causes of accidents that could have been avoided with easy assistance. Smart, semi-driverless cars could be the answer to these costly problems. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cad20936036e,7B9A897C5297,"Ultimately, driverless cars would have an extreme influence on today's society. The assistance from technology has changed the world we live in and will continue to do so. Driverless cars are the step in the right direction for driving innovations all across the world. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+726e76ff3187,7BE2D386E765,"The ""Face on Mars"" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years. Some poeple think the Face is hard core evidence of life on mars. Meanwile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+38b99361ab03,7BE2D386E765,The face on mars is a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+181aa5678f52,7BE2D386E765,"Mars has powerfull winds just like we do on earth which if the dirt gets built up on rocks it can cause a face looking shape. The face is just a maountain with craters up at the top which makes it look somewhat like a human face. Mission controllers prepared to look again. ""It's not easy to target Cydonia,"" says Garvin. ""In fact, it's hard work."" Mars gGlobal Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5km-wide strips. ""We just don't pass over the Face very often."" he noted ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ca185abf057b,7BE2D386E765,"But not everyone was satisfied. The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees norht martian latitude where it was winter in April '98- a cloudy time of year on the red planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cdd4af2216b1,7BE2D386E765,"In conclution, the face could be real or it could be a fake. But from teh research that we have conducted at NASA concludes that it is just a natural landform caused by geological occurences. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e2cbccd360b,7BE3FAF66A0C,I think we should end the Electoral college because it is not fair to each american. ,Position,Effective,,,
+8a63cbf60730,7BE3FAF66A0C,"It's not fair because voters can't control who they pick, and the person they vote for end up losing the presidential election ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ed0e699d1e9c,7BE3FAF66A0C,Even though our founding fathers established this act it doesn't mean it benefits our country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b385d928dd7f,7BE3FAF66A0C,"The electors are chosen by the candidate's democratic or republican's party. Some states has a ""winner-take-all"" process. When that process is over and the candidate win the presidential vote in that state, it then shows which electors will represent your state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84af52a8e5bd,7BE3FAF66A0C,Although this would seem like a good way to vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f31dc197b780,7BE3FAF66A0C,I disagree. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+313aafac6a7f,7BE3FAF66A0C,It would be a lot easier for every citizen to just make their own personal vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c435435ed81c,7BE3FAF66A0C,"For an example, back in 2000 Al Gore had way more popular voters than George W. Bush who had a higher number of voters due to the Electoral College process. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd68c8211c89,7BE3FAF66A0C,I think every state should reconsider picking the electors because they always seem to defy us. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf137ee2aad4,7BE3FAF66A0C,Losing the Electoral College can also avoid any mishap in the future. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cd2ca5e13f0d,7BE3FAF66A0C,What if there was a state that had equal number of votes? what would happen then ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5d13fdb706a,7BE3FAF66A0C,"It has been stated that over 60 percent of citizens would rather vote towards their candidate they select, rather than going through the process ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87df7834e79c,7BE3FAF66A0C,congress should consider the thoughts and opinions that us voters have. If they wish to not do so the candidate with the popular votes could potentially lose presidency. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+09b47fd4ad30,7BE3FAF66A0C,"In conclusion to the eyes of the government it may seem like a proper way to vote, but to us it's unfair. You should abolish the Electoral College for good so we can elect the right candidate who deserves presidency. In order to get rid of this process we should take a single vote from every citizens.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+80a0f501aa08,7BEB99575D62,you should chaange the voting rules from Electoral College to popular vote because the Electoral College is to confusing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e74328c92e80,7BEB99575D62,Popular vote is a more efficent way to vote for the presedent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+774e2d697bc7,7BEB99575D62,For example in the article Does the Electoral College Work it says that the Electoral College votes by people who are profetionals and popular vote is by the people of the United States of America. This quote explains how the popular vote is better because it is decided by the people not the government. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ae70b6e1b17,7BEB99575D62,Another  reason why you should change the voting rules is that the Electoral College doesnt even work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bde65550e859,7BEB99575D62,"In the article it explains how''under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the presedent ,but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.''This quote explains that the electoral college has nothing to do with the people the vote is not decided by the people why have any people to begin with.
+
+I just think overall you should consider the tip and change the voting rules. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b7051e13c77,7BEB99575D62,Another reason why the electoral college has to be gone is it is un orginized. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2830107302b2,7BEB99575D62,"In the text ''The indefensible electoral college why even the best-laid defense of the systeme are wrong.''the quote explains that even though both systems of voting work,popular vote is the more dominant rule. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2e4457b6ffb5,7BEB99575D62,In conclution you need to change the system for the people and overall just make voting a lot easier.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6fe55417b1ce,7C057FA3B1CA,"What have Richard NIxon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole, all in their time agreed on?
+
+The Electoral College.
+
+The Electoral College is not a place, its a process.
+
+By the passage of source 1 , the founding fathers established the Electoral College  as a compromise, between election of the President by a vote in Congress and the election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+90c9ba2c1347,7C057FA3B1CA,"Keeping the Electoral College is important. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+901963823993,7C057FA3B1CA,Having an Electoral College is a safe way to ensure that everyone get to envoice there opinion. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a53f0620417,7C057FA3B1CA,"For example, the Electoral college avoids problems and tries to fix eveything so that everyone can be happy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e4642b9eb4e0,7C057FA3B1CA,Many people don't like the fact of the Electoral College because they feel that their vote doesn't count ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+855b60ec2619,7C057FA3B1CA,But really every one's vote does. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+89f5281d7be3,7C057FA3B1CA,When the American citizens vote and there is a tie between the two candidates then thats another time when we use the Electoral College. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bda6efa6150,7C057FA3B1CA,Each Candidate running for President in each state has his or her own group of electors. Each party (democratic or republican) selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ea015b7d6488,7C057FA3B1CA,I strongly believe that we should keep the Electoral College as any force of back-up when it comes down to voting!  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ab9cec30da1f,7C06DE3320C2,I have an arguement in between keeping the Electoral college process or changing to election by popular vote for the U.S president ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9b7931c0497f,7C06DE3320C2,I debate on the behalf of Electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a4bf1f289ac,7C06DE3320C2,"because,I think with the popular voting process way the only people who vote for you takes favor in you,which means if more people like you then the more votes you'll recieve,therefore you'll have a better shot of winning ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2d7757c5d11c,7C06DE3320C2,"Me personally think it's fine just the way it is,why because ""I think the electoral process is a better solution ",Position,Adequate,,,
+79fa790ff9c9,7C06DE3320C2,"the voting would not be based on just popularity but also on who's going to be better at what they do,or the person who's going to make the positive choices[desicions ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+15aa4bc384b0,7C06DE3320C2,"There are so many positive things on why to keep the electoral process and I also make room for the errors of it so dont think im on a one man train,because im not ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a1ea1bece9a,7C06DE3320C2,"The electoral college consists of 538 electors which means a majority of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. Which ever state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation:which also means one for each member in the
+
+H.O.R plus two for your senators...Most state's just have a winner take all ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+234713489d2b,7C06DE3320C2,"theres also some things thats wrong with the electoral college...1 : is that under the electoral college system,voters vote not for the president,but for a slate of electors, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+830d5723e4ca,7C06DE3320C2,"[Example]if you lived right in texas,and wanted to vote for (John) kerry,you'd vote for a slate of 34 Domocratic electors pledged to kerry. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8715ff1dcc21,7C06DE3320C2,"How ever the also are some great things on why we should keep the electoral college one is because,its is not liberal or conservative. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f83b7ce2d3d7,7C06DE3320C2,"The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have a transregional appeal. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0356128d6695,7C06DE3320C2,"With the popular vote system,theres not much consisderation tooken in on what should really be done ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+aada4b6c49db,7C06DE3320C2,"No matter on how it goes,I say we keep the electoral college system..... 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d81791be359,7C32A43580A5,"Imagine a world where you get out of bed. Fix your self or your child something to eat, Get ready and walk out of the door. Only not to a car that you youself will be drivin, but a car that will drive you any where you want it too. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2859bb41ca1f,7C32A43580A5,The problem that I have with driverless cars ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d137e0fde8bd,7C32A43580A5,I believe it's another way for humans to be lazy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58583373c738,7C32A43580A5,"In todays world we have machines to vacum our floor, and wash our dishes. Now we want cars to drive us places? The world is getting lazy. America is one of the countries with the highest obesity rate, now driving a car has nothing to do with your weight, but it has something to do with your mind. When driving a car you have to be alert. Not only for yourself but for others around you. When I drive my mother always tells me to watch myself and the people around me, because you may be paying attention, but others might not be. When growing up getting and driving a car at 16 is almost every teenagers dream, but how will the future teenagers of the world get that experience if we have driverless vehicles? When I got my license it was a feeling of accomplishment. I had read that long drivers manual forover a month and when I took both of those test I was ready, but with a driverless car will a person even get that feelling? Will they even need a license or even a car of their own? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2118a8230f94,7C32A43580A5,"Now I get what the article says about driverless cars use less fuel than a normal one, and ""Driving fun in a new way"".
+
+Having a driverless car would be pretty cool. Getting into a car and typing in where you want to go and the car just taking you there. Or just telling it what to do due to voice actiivation. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8161d4901d29,7C32A43580A5,"But, is driving suppose to be fun? Or a way to get to one place or another. If driving was fun it wouldn't be safe. People would be drag racing throughout the city causing chaos and getting into serious damage. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6b30f34af77b,7C32A43580A5,"Moving into a world where technology is becoming more and more relevant is good, but driverless cars..Not so much. It was very innovative,and futuristic, but in my opinion a waste of money, time, and space. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7386de76284b,7C499255C798,"Although people say they don't have the time to do community service, that is just an excuse for not wanting to do some work for our community. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+88a46af6e850,7C499255C798,"You should definitely take action and have SCHOOL_NAME students do community service work, at least a few hours a week, so SCHOOL_NAME, and SCHOOL_NAME can become a much better community. ",Position,Effective,,,
+c3dc5a20c68b,7C499255C798,The students here at SCHOOL_NAME are definitely capable of working hard. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06057437e8c0,7C499255C798,"They do it every day at school, and even at home. So there is absolutely no excuse they can say, that can keep them from doing some work for our community. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a74940d689e,7C499255C798,"Some excuses might be, "" I have too much homework to do after school"", or "" I already participate in many after school activities, isn't that enough""? ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+206605c535cc,7C499255C798,"If they want to make excuses, maybe you could have them do a couple more hours of work. And for the
+
+Because students are fully capable of doing good for their community ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b6eeff66ccec,7C499255C798,"Since you are principal of our school, you do a lot of things for SCHOOL_NAME, like giving the students a safe learning facility. The students can at least also do the same as you, because we then will not only be giving back to Wauwatosa, we would also be giving back to you ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2905209b43d,7C499255C798,"We can do any kind of jobs, that kids are capable of, anyways. For example, we can rake the leaves in fall, or shovel driveways for our neighbors. We could even collect canned goods for the hungry and poor. We can do little and big things, but still give back to you, and give back to Wauwatosa. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+daa740417ae2,7C499255C798,"If you make SCHOOL_NAME students perform community service, I can guarantee that not only SCHOOL_NAME, but our school will be a much better place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bac07268596c,7C499255C798,"The students will not be as rowdy, and more kids will pick up trash laying on the floor in hallways. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e8085a756fd7,7C499255C798,"For example, when a student drops something, more students will take action to return it to them. Or if they see garbage, they will pick it up. But this won't just happen on school grounds, it will happen all over our community of SCHOOL_NAME. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf56947abd36,7C57BE3EF6BA,Imagine you are a scientist at NASA sicussing the face withsomeone who thinks it was created by alliens. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+660788d3209c,7C57BE3EF6BA,Well we all know that alliens are not real it has been provin many time by other scients. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+28889cb9afff,7C57BE3EF6BA,"I would unerstand why people would think it was created by these myth cretures, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+0403b662bf90,7C57BE3EF6BA,but u also got to think about how land andother things can form tier self in to living fetures like for some exsample. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+94bbea9d85cd,7C57BE3EF6BA,On an sunny day you look outside and u see some clouds and you stare at it for a while. Than all the sudden u see faceses and animals that you reconginize. Like one day I saw a little dolphine in the sky and I got the thinking theirs no wasy their could be a dolphine in the sky. So thats like me saying that thiers a man shaped face on mars tat could have been civilisation on the planet of mars ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5d0f5bddaaaf,7C57BE3EF6BA,"but dont think wrong i believe that its possabel for people on earth to actual live on that, because theirs other scientists that has proven that to most people and their starting to recrute peopole to actual go to mars. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9a2c7f486bc0,7C57BE3EF6BA,Also their for in the passage it saids it was a huge rock formation like come on now we know a real life humae face is not as huge for it to be spotted from face. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76a5ced0d920,7C57BE3EF6BA,Also on mars their is a lot of diffrent shape and sizes and holes like in the moon so its just do univers doing what it does best to form diffrent imagies and diffrent shapes like the was it formed earth and broke diffrent things apart and also land. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9abef0868cd6,7C57BE3EF6BA,If u also look in the passage at paragraph 12 it saids in the first sentence that. What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa----LANDFORMS common around the american west. to also make people intrested in the artical the put a. Huge rock formation from mars so theri for their also saying it was made from these mythical cretures called. Alliens and why would alliens want to make a human face in the first pllace if you think about it it actually make sense. For them just to attract people to a new land form that they have found that has a more like humans fetures. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d617e327c4b5,7C57BE3EF6BA,So thats why i say that alliens did not make that image or a landform human like image on mars. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3db869cd6c3b,7C57BE3EF6BA,So thats what i was a scientist at NSAS discussing the face with someone who thinks it was alliens that formed a human like imagie on mars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+781117fdebbb,7C7D34EB1627,What i think is better is to have the phones off in class ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d84eb86e6737,7C7D34EB1627,because if it rings or vibrates your going to be distracted ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3901ef9b5bd0,7C7D34EB1627,your not going to focus on your work and your going to end up calling your friend and laughing loud and he/she is not going to listen on what the homework assignment is or what they have to do for the class work this is why you have to keep your cell phones off in class. then later this wont happen to you and always be focus in school and focus on your friends later school goes first for you could get a good job. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+107bf4c5bf13,7C7D34EB1627,and if they want to decide if they want to have their cell phones on in class is not going to be better for the teachers because they cant help the students learn and what is going on in life and what do they have to do as their assignment. they want to be texting in class and be distracted. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a9d7270a336e,7C7D34EB1627,"
+Only one person will always make a difference in life if they do something wrong the other person needs to come in and say that they didn't do that, they didn't text in class he/she was paying attention then later the teacher asks them a question and they don't know the answer to the question and thats when they catch them that they were texting or talking so is better off keeping the phones off or on silent for it won't make any noise and you will be focus in school more and you will get your grades up higher and will never be distracted until you go home and then you could do all the texting you want to do and never have u grades because of the texting if you have it on vibrate ignore it and continue working on your class work or homework . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+450230abbd67,7C8094BF63DE,I believe that voting for the President of the United States should be based on the present idea of the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e38ba40da40,7C8094BF63DE,There are many elements that play into the reasoning for this. The Electoral College is a process developed by the makers of the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. It consists of 538 electors with each state holding a certain amout of these electors based on the population of that state. Candidates try to gain the vote of electors focusing on larger states with more electors ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+14a9d71e61c7,7C8094BF63DE,It was something created by the makers and founding fathers of the Constitution and something so important should not be changed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+051678611d08,7C8094BF63DE,"Presidential candidates focus on gaining the majority vote of large states in order to obtain more electors. A large state such as California containing over 35 million voters should have as much of a say in electing a president as a small state like Wyoming only containing 500,000 voters. The Electoral College makes sure that the ""majority"" of voters doesn't decide an election and everyone has a say. The ""winner takes all"" system evens out the playing field for all those little states who want just as much of a say in determining a new president as a large one does. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52d4ffb72980,7C8094BF63DE,The idea of a Electoral College adds a sense of competition persuading a candidate to influence states with a high number of electoral votes making the race for interesting. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9bfbbfe29bde,7C8094BF63DE,Swing states are a huge deal in this process for they mainly decide the election with the ability to change an election in a heartbeat. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f1ed82c63ae,7C8094BF63DE,If a majority voting system was incorporated into the election system instead of the Electoral College the process would become much more complicated than it already is. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a77e2cb9afa,7C8094BF63DE,Voters should be able to vote not just for a new president but for a slate of electors who aid in electing the president.. These electors are appointed to represent the people in choosing the candidate of their choice who they feel is best suited for the position. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c29f3b0003b,7C8094BF63DE,Many people against the Electoral College argue that the system is not acceptable because of the possibility of a tie due to the even number of electoral votes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6f434376ff02,7C8094BF63DE,This reasoning is highly probably and has never happened before.                          ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+aa40834597c6,7C929E4D63A5,Community service means to make your community a better place then it was before! ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+35f11e261e8c,7C929E4D63A5,I think all schools should have a community service program. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fae74021d05e,7C929E4D63A5,"I mean would you want some people come from china and ""say o man this place is a dump lets get out of here ?"" Cause i know i wouldn't! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b0876694c91,7C929E4D63A5,Just think if you ever went and did some community service everyone would like you for cleaning the community ! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5be74461b70b,7C929E4D63A5,If i had community service i would need some help ! ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e495158ee01c,7C929E4D63A5,"So go out and encourage a friend or two , and tell them what it would be like ! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc9b71f9e0de,7C929E4D63A5,"Yes it would take some time out of your life, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cbf346aecb9a,7C929E4D63A5,but its for a good cause ! ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c89075ad8b57,7C929E4D63A5,Homeless People do community service and they don't even have a home to go to after word ! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f7e2b05bd45,7C929E4D63A5,But if your worried about what other people or even friends think of you then obviously their not a true friend ! A true friend would go out and be by your side helping to make Yours and others a better community ! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+482207907aad,7C929E4D63A5,"Even if your community service is only at school that's okay too, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bd1a41569f7,7C929E4D63A5,"teachers always need help at school !! You can baby sit some kids, clean up litter , tutor some little kids n elementary school , ! See community service isn't all about cleaning or picking up trash its about doing something different You can recycle , you can throw and separate your trash into different trash cans to help the economic! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e908d98674c,7C929E4D63A5,"Just the other day i was with a friend and his grandmother, and we were in the car driving down the road and the next thing i know , someone's car breaks down in the middle of the street and we help them! It was a woman and her son and she just picked up her son from school , and we had to push their car back to a store and we took them home !
+
+yes it was tough to push a car but as soon as we started pushing all together we finally got it to start moving and after we started to get it to move more people came and helped after everyone started to help ,it was like a piece of cake After that day i was excited to help someone out their that needed help ! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca0d8ddcbd25,7C929E4D63A5,So go out their help someone you know that needs help or even maybe clean your yard up? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8965e88a51f4,7C929E4D63A5,If you ask some friend to help i am sure enough that they will go and help you out ! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24b71b2333e5,7CE8F3872E67,I think that they should not change the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c4471123edc,7CE8F3872E67,it tells us what kind of president we will have in the future and what kind of changes he will make ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+be441fef7779,7CE8F3872E67,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. You see this is something that happened a long time ago the founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7f7aefa9dcc,7CE8F3872E67,This is a system that makes sure that we know what kind of president we are putting in the white house and what are things to make this state a better state to live in and to have a good job ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96d8a12b5f57,7CE8F3872E67,"Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the district of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purpose of the Electoral College. The electors are generally chosen by the candidates political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. The president only haves four years, it is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. When you vote for your state they have a thing called winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. However, Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of proportional representation. When the election is done they have a thing they do called Certificated of Ascertainment it lists all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The Ascertainments are then sent to the Congress and then to the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9794b1134359,7CE8F3872E67,In the article of The Indefensible Electoral College its trying to ask you why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong and it tells you why ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+13835c990e75,7CE8F3872E67,"What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. chamber of commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? They were trying to abolishing the electoral college and they were not alone, according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won thwe popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5584354d0e27,7CE8F3872E67,This is the thing that can not be changed because this is a system that we can pull up see what they were elected for and why they were voted president and how many times. It helps us how we can choose the right president or the right vice president. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+c02e38fd6909,7CE8F3872E67,"In 1960 in Hawaii, Vice President Richard Nixon, who was president over the senate, validated only his opponents electors, but he made sure to do so without establishing a precedent. This happened a long time before i was born. You see only one state can casts only one vote in Wyoming,representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California,who represent 35 million voters. In 1968,a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election;in 1976, a tie would have occurred if a mere 5,559 voters on Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a43f75110ca,7CE8F3872E67,"In a article i read it says that there are five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president. There are called Certainty of Outcome,Everyones President,Swing States,Big States, and the final one is Avoid Run-Off Elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1250f6f4e18d,7CE8F3872E67,Each one tells us how choosing the president and shows us a map how it works and we can see which state shows a breakdown of the number of electoral votes given to each state. This is something that can help us understand how to vote and how long they will be the president or the vice president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c45f4d555b86,7CE8F3872E67,i think that we should not change the Electoral College because how would it work without it and how would we pick the next president. This is a hard thing because it would take time to discusses it with the senators and it would take a lot of votes to agree or disagree to the idea. This is why i think that they should not change this because its been around longer before i was born. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+247c3c45386c,7CEB4836BAFA,"I understand that you want us to do community service, but some people just don't have time to do things like that ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b70d22e7390b,7CEB4836BAFA,"Like, say that you say we have to do it on a Saturday at 9:00am to 12:00pm not everybody can make that time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0460ae128d5,7CEB4836BAFA,Also not everybody want to do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+027968b0de54,7CEB4836BAFA,I think that you should do it at a different school because you are trying to force us to do community service and we don't want to do it. Why don't you get out of that desk and you do it too. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+71df9cf3358a,7CEB4836BAFA,"Sorry, not to be mean, but I really want to do it, but I don't have time for it. I'm in the 8th grade and i get a lot of homework to do. And I have to keep up with my grades. And I have to focus on the CMT test that is coming up ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e546574926a0,7CEB4836BAFA,I think that it should be optional weather we do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3597588834b5,7CFABEFA5DFA,"I have recently read an article by the name of ¨Driverless Cars Are Coming¨, and asked my opinion. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+16832578b36d,7CFABEFA5DFA,I believe they could be very dangerous ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+235ec0f4cf09,7CFABEFA5DFA,"they´re many sensors and techology to do with the car, who is to say they couldn´t malfunction, or intercept waves a sentence from paragraph 4 indicates my fear,¨For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors....Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, rotatin sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors....¨ and much more. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d6f8f782e39,7CFABEFA5DFA,I also believe the driverless cars could put the country in even more debt. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b11538d91c42,7CFABEFA5DFA,"In paragraph six they state that¨Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars.¨
+
+The last time I herd the United States was eight trillion dollars in debt, should we really consider adding two hundred million per radar to that eight trillion? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6656efb6b255,7CFABEFA5DFA,"I also would like to go back to the subject of malfuctioning.
+
+If a driverless car malfunction, the company could possibly and most likely be sewed, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a2dbd53e780,7CFABEFA5DFA,"we would have even more money added to that debt to try to prevent it from happening again and no one really knows spending all that money would even prevent it from malfunctioning again, and lastly we would have some very unhappy customers on our hands.
+
+We could be talking riots, people wanting their money back, shootings, killing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0fa33197fd2f,7CFABEFA5DFA,"So many unanswered possibilites could go wrong with this idea and production of ¨driverless cars¨. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+33287ce744e7,7CFABEFA5DFA,I believe that ¨driverless cars¨ productivity should be shut down for what we don´t know could become of it in the future ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0cec8a44f67a,7CFABEFA5DFA,"wether it be money, mobs of angry customers or people that have been offected by them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f9dcec538823,7D14E283380C,It states that keeping the electoral college is a more promising way to vote for the president of the united states ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+229bf8421441,7D14E283380C,If they change it to election by popular vote then it probably wont be fair. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47c507a5fb8b,7D14E283380C,"Just like in 1960 when they send two slates of electors to congress but that was probably because they had the popular vote and not the elertoral college. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7acf5c6b870,7D14E283380C,"The electoral college is a process,not a place people might have thought that is what place like maybe a college [school]. The thing is who ever thought that was wrong beacuse it was found by the father established it in the constitution as a compromise. Its a long story lets just cut to the chase the electoral college conists of 538 electors a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee60ee6947c9,7D14E283380C,if you elect your president by the popular then the required number will be higher and possible wont have a president because they will never finsh counting the votes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2dba2cd6710f,7D14E283380C,Electoral college is the best way to go beacuse like that will only have one slate of electors. But if the popular vote then most likely will end up with two or more slates of electors and personlitly I wouldnt like that ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eea95d0dd7c5,7D14E283380C,It would be better just to stick with the electoral college so people and the congress wouldnt have to go through so much work just to pick a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35ed5a4dd860,7D14E283380C,Look also if the popular vote that doesnt mean that they will win most likely they will lose the predidency for example Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60 percent of the voters. See having the  popular vote wouldnt be the best thing to do. Just stay with the electoral college dont make it so hard on people ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a7e993323134,7D462AA4E1FC,I do not think that every student should be forced to do community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f3c79a340b22,7D462AA4E1FC,"All community service is voluntary work, if its not voluntary, then it is just work ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ba5c1c97205b,7D462AA4E1FC,"People who do community service enjoy and want to help the community, if they are forced to do community service, they would not perform to the best of their abilities and waste their time. This would not be best for the schools and the community. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+200fb5ef2ce6,7D462AA4E1FC,The concept of community service is that you go do your work that you got and you do it for free because you wanted to and you feel good about yourself. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+015a384b7d34,7D462AA4E1FC,"Forcing a person to do this would take away all the positive effects except maybe getting the job done. Community service isn't always needed either. So having a very random schedule would be very hard for the students to keep up with.
+
+This would cause stress to the students, teachers would have a hard time planning each day due to late notice help, and the community wouldn't get much help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b5ab2e35dbc7,7D5909D8FBA3,"Community service would be a great thing for every student to be required to do. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+cae57ca6a1ff,7D5909D8FBA3,Even though some people may think it is a pretty big time waster ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d00d83cbb6a8,7D5909D8FBA3,"helping the community is doing an act of service, which every student should be able to enjoy. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4b87aaab21ec,7D5909D8FBA3,"I believe that doing community service would help the community, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b56e05f86c9f,7D5909D8FBA3,make students feel good ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7146eb6e5e14,7D5909D8FBA3,encourage good work skills ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa0298cb64cd,7D5909D8FBA3,"People always like having a good deed be done for them.
+
+People have jobs for each thing we could help out with, but they would LOVE for us to help them.
+
+I mean, wouldn't you like it if somebody helped you in your job?
+
+Doing community service is a great way to help us to feel good about the community. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adbbe321fd73,7D5909D8FBA3,"The people who don't like the idea usually become pessimists who hate everything, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c81cc87ab81b,7D5909D8FBA3,we wouldn't like to make students feel that way. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b97bb34f4f0a,7D5909D8FBA3,We should encourage students to work hard for the community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+282243d75855,7D5909D8FBA3,"Doing service means that you're doing something good, which makes you feel good about yourself.
+
+I think community service would help everybody - our community, our school, and the students.
+
+Requiring each student to do community service would be a great idea, and it might make the students feel better then they have been. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be391863a8e1,7D5909D8FBA3,"They might feel so good about their decision, that they do some more service when it's not a requirement.
+
+It might change into a personal goal instead. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0bdaca2d658,7D5909D8FBA3,"Community service will change people's lives and attitudes for the better. They will be in a better mood, and they will live a more happier life. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e70d0d6ff71a,7D5909D8FBA3,"I think it would be best to require community service for all students.
+
+Community service can help people, make students feel great, and encourage them to always do more.
+
+Community service is a great idea for the students to do and enjoy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+57d03d5ee58d,7D681EE99FF3,"it is a vote qualified by the citizen and the founding fathers established it in the constitution. all of the votes have to go to the electors and to the congress and then they pick the president and the vice president. the election is held every four years on the same month and day. the governor lists all of the people who ran for presidentin your state.
+
+the winner takes all system that awards all electors to the winning presidental canididate. the governor prepares a cerificate of ascertainment. the certificate of ascertainment also declares the winning presidental candidatein your state and shows which electors are representing your state. the 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85efbe25d35a,7D681EE99FF3,"you would have to vote for a slate if you want to vote for john kerry. not always do the voters control whom their electors vote for. seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all,including rhode island and south carolina. but each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee. in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state.
+
+the popular vote was really close in florida in 2012.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44751b844047,7D6BE3FB87CA,"I Write to you about the Electional Colleges because, i beleive that it is fair to change it to which ever runner has the most votes will become president. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1011501ab86d,7D6BE3FB87CA,I understand that each candidate running for prsident has his or her own group of electors chosen by the political party but it depends if they chose their electors respondsibly ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c91a01701e2,7D6BE3FB87CA,"Electoral College consists of 538 electors , but a majority of 270 votes are required to elect the president. Voters don't vote for the president they would have to vote for a a slate of democratic electors pledged to that person and if that person won they would go to congress and that runner would get that amount of electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b602191e4d82,7D6BE3FB87CA,But if a tie happens the electrol vote would go to the house of representatives where they would have to decide who the president will be and senates would decide who the Vice President would be. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b7835aa7fc18,7D6BE3FB87CA,But in all my oppionion should be that who ever has the most popular vote will vbe prsedent. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+007de914a712,7E0264CD0ADF,"The Electoral College, established by the Founding Fathers within the Constitution, was meant to serve as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and a popular vote of citizens. What the founding fathers failed to see was the many outstanding flaws within the Electoral College. For many imperative reasons that cannot be avoided, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d513eb0e7c3a,7E0264CD0ADF,"elections must be changed to the method of popular vote, and the Electoral College must not be a part of the United States' elections any longer. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+8abb9e8ba180,7E0264CD0ADF,"The first and foremost reason why the Electoral College should no longer be kept in the U.S is because it will only lead to negative consequences. This has been observed in the past, and it must be prevented from occuring once more. One element of this disaster factor is that electors could defy the will of the people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+400260e3122a,7E0264CD0ADF,"Source 2 informs readers that state legislators are are technically responsible for picking electors. These electors could very easily decide to vote upon who they would like to see in office, rather than who the citizens want. The impact of this would be trecharous when the wrong person is elected as president. Source two quotes, ""Back in 1960, segregationsists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with new electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy."" This means that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy. How is that for a compromise between Congress and U.S voters? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cc5ebf449d8a,7E0264CD0ADF,"Furthermore, another way in which keeping the Electoral College would be disastorous would be seen in the case of a state sending two states of electors. Bradford Plumer reminded those in favor of the Electoral College that this has happened in Hawaii in 1960. Luckily, enormous downfall was avoided because Vice President Richard Nixon, presider over the Senate, validated his opponent's electors and did so ""without establishing a precedent."" However, America may not be so lucky the next time this may take place. Senators in each and every state must open their eyes and really see what is happening in their country. The U.S must change its elections to the popular vote system, where all of these impacts will be avoided. The Electoral College does nothing for its citizens, and states may send two states of electors to it, and for these reasons, America will face a very unhappy situation if we keep this system. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b71e54ddfe5d,7E0264CD0ADF,"Popular vote is a much better system than the Electoral College because unlike the Electoral College, it is actually fair for its citizens. America, which has suffered greatly to acheieve equality and liberty is held back by one thing-- the Electoral College. This is suffered by the United States' citizens because of the College's winner-take-all system. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c44cf5ae2d6d,7E0264CD0ADF,"Through this, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. Source 2 refers back to the 2000 campaign, saying, ""...seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all...and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad."" How can a president be properly elected with this system in place? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+14d145b4d7a7,7E0264CD0ADF,"Source 3 attempts to discredit this claim, aguing, ""Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign..."" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1c85554528d7,7E0264CD0ADF,What they fail to realize is that those citizens may not even know who they are voting for! It is lucid that there is simply no valid argument for outting the fate of the presidency into the hands of a couple swing voters in a state. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+26907494a05c,7E0264CD0ADF,"In addition, as far as being unfair goes, there are also unpredicatable scenerios that may occur in elections. These scenerios are far from fair to anybody. For instance, there is always the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. If that were to happen, the election would be thrown into the House of Representatives where voting would be handed over to state delegations. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+883459fa7d64,7E0264CD0ADF,"Plumer quotes, ""Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for Congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to...unfair."" This would not happen if the U.S adopts the popular vote method, where the most popular candidate will win and reflect the citizens who placed him or her into office. The Electoral College is nothing other than unfair to the citizens who rely on it to elect their president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+162fffccb1e8,7E0264CD0ADF,"For many reasons, election methods must be changed to popular vote, and the Electoral College must be disgarded. It will only lead to a profound disaster, and it is also extremely biased and unfair. The United States must take action, one state at a time, to reverse the negative path it is on. This is the only way the U.S can finally reach its long term goal-- complete prosperity.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c6bc3a879391,7E026B760EA0,"I think you should change the policy, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7529ba2e3e45,7E026B760EA0,"students probably don't get an ""B"" just like that cause of there grades or low, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+606ca9f6b905,7E026B760EA0,some kids play good for sports ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+191069f5a129,7E026B760EA0,"other kids would like to join. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+377116d67c67,7E026B760EA0,"they be trying hard to pull up their grades but it won't wroth it cause you want let them participate because you want everybody that has an ""A"" or a ""B"" average. Another reason, why because students would look at you, and say ""we tried "", and it would not be right to see other students playing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4ec8c8cdc0c,7E026B760EA0,"students don't want to be in the class rooms all day just doing work or any other thing, instead of having fun with the other kids, and talking to their friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30b7146bf07c,7E026B760EA0,change the policy because other people would like to join. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7fa191e2c516,7E3CDEFECEC6,I personally do not think that community service should be required by all students. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b94f914db7d9,7E3CDEFECEC6,"Yes, community service is beneficial to the community, but students need to focus on one thing, and one thing only. School. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+89acdcefd898,7E3CDEFECEC6,"I believe that community service can be an extracurricular activity outside of school, if anything. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+7ccc808f0b37,7E3CDEFECEC6,"You see, I know how it's like to be a student, as do you, and I think we can both agree on how hectic situations can get throughout the year. Homework becomes burdensome at times, schoolwork becomes tedious. Your life is bifurcated between school and outside of school, leaving almost no room for anything else. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+77f7ca8fd25e,7E3CDEFECEC6,"If you were to make community service mandatory at school, how do you think that will unravel? For all you know, petitions could be made by my fellow classmates. I'm sure some of my peers agree with my point of view regarding this topic. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88c8f1f22f3d,7E3E96B4F614,"Dear state senator, I think that we should change to start voting by popular vote ",Position,Effective,,,
+5ac694b7f297,7E3E96B4F614,it will be easier for the voters ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1dac6d234099,7E3E96B4F614,"is a more realistic way of voting. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+d91cbe023513,7E3E96B4F614,"When voting and following the rules of the electoral college, many voters get confused. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ab3e2bf4a685,7E3E96B4F614,"As is says in source 2, many voters vote for the wrong person. They also don't always get controll over who they vote for. Say they voted for one canidate to be their state senator, well with that one person comes many people that have ""pledged"" themselves to that canidate. They would be voting for the canidate and these many people that have pledged themselves to him and they don't even know it.
+
+Also as they say in source 2, the election of 2000 was a huge mishap in presidential election history. In states like Louisiana, they had people replace democratic electors so that the popular vote that would've went to one of the canidates, didn't actually go through. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c0a1b17b3be7,7E3E96B4F614,Although the electoral college is good for getting exact numbers and helps solve disputes( source 3) ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9219bd4bb86f,7E3E96B4F614,it is an uruly and untrustworthy way of voting and should not be used anymore. Voters are easily confused when voting and many do not follow up on what is happening during election time. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c6f36b3e7db9,7E3E96B4F614,I think that a better way to votee would be to vote more often and give the electors another chance to be relected so that after a few months if voters changed their mind then they could reelect someone else. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a039e109765b,7E3E96B4F614,"Popular vote is a much better idea not only becuase it is more realistic, but because it is easier to understand. Even some of our presidents like Richard Nixon and Bob Dole have thought that this was the way to go. Not only do they believe this, but they lost their presidency votes becuase of the electoral college. I think that they are just trying to scam voters and pick someone that would be best for them, not for our country. I think that by using the electoral college method, they are cheating into picking the winners, but if we used popular vote, this wouldnt happen. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+691555c4bb15,7E4687A7CAB1,"Throughout history, mankind has depended on hands-on work for critical purposes.
+
+However, technology has evolved as a tool to assist us to do labor more efficiently and quickly.
+
+It is an important decision whether or not to support driverless cars because it can affect the conflicts due to this choice.
+
+Human error has been a common factor for automobile accidents across the nation, which has claimed many lives. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6f1a25eae926,7E4687A7CAB1,Driverless cars can be another tool for the human population that could save lives. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6bbe52ab1094,7E4687A7CAB1,"To begin with, manufacturers have tinkered on this project for many years by several strategies such as General Motors and their concept car that ran on a unique test track.
+
+It began in the 1950s, using binary code to alert the car system.
+
+Unfortunately, upgrades in that period of time were too expensive to be used widespread.
+
+This began the alternative option of smarter cars, rather than intellegent roads to assist drivers.
+
+Likewise, the government is obstinant on testing for every single liability smarter cars can be held for.
+
+It is above all priorities for the smarter cars to ensure complete saftey from dangerous hazard conditions on the road.
+
+To prevent such conditions, developers considered the use of driverless cars to assist drivers instead of total control at all times.
+
+Furthermore, scientists and engineers have added ideas from each other, enabling cars to even sensor dangerous obstacles.
+
+For example, the BMW ""Traffic Jam Assistant,"" is one of the many cars that can preform driverless to a certain extent, allowing for a human driver to access the controls if necessary. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afaa1c41efc1,7E4687A7CAB1,This evidence concludes that driverless cars are potential as a wonderful tool to help in the saftey of others in a vehicle. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fb2442c0a3d,7E4687A7CAB1,"Driverless cars could be the next common technology among the human population like computers or phones.
+
+From this, humanity will continue evolving and strive through conflicts similar to this subject.
+
+However, another choice for us, individually is whether or not to accept change.        ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9ec236e4ada3,7E492FFD9778,"In the article Driverless Cars Are Coming, they talk about the positive and negative things that could happen. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+3edece387ae3,7E492FFD9778,This essay is going to be against the article because a driverless car doesn't sound safe to some. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2993f2ba0bcf,7E492FFD9778,"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b91d77fcbac1,7E492FFD9778,"If you are in a car but the car is driving itself, what are you suppose to do if the car has a malfunction and you cant control it? Just because it is on television doesn't mean it needs to be brought to life so accidents can happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b242ff13229,7E492FFD9778,"In the article it says ""These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well; but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was to expensive to be practical. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a7e9ec1deaa3,7E492FFD9778,People are not going to want to go on the interstate and there be construction twenty-four seven. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14a3d8cef53c,7E492FFD9778,"Aso some people know, before you can maake these cars you have to have if approved and make sure they are safe enough to be on the roads ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+70f1023565e1,7E492FFD9778,"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars. Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in oreder to cover liability in the case of an accident. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. People would probably like to know what specific conditions they are refering too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+59324e894a4c,7E492FFD9778,Some people are smarter than others and they know right from wrong. But also people have a better and even greater chance of not being hurt. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d22ad44f79ca,7E492FFD9778,"Say you are driving down the road and a child runs out infront of you, does the car automatically stop or does it hit the child. If a teen is given a driverless car, they would probably have too much fun with it. The cars would also need a gps so that you could let it know where to take you because its not going to know automatically want to go to grandmas house that night. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af83793ac2f5,7E492FFD9778,"People today are probably wondering how much these cars cost, do they have insurance, what happens if i have an accident or are the cars even safe ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b36f271f5c8,7E492FFD9778,If a car is not proven safe then no one needs that car and it will not be approvedd by the lawmakers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e88432b5caf0,7E492FFD9778,"A driverless car is not needed in this world. It is already dangerous out there with the cars we have, it would be best ti stick with the cars that we can drive, not driverless. Driverless cars could make the world even more dangerous if there was a malfunction with it.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e8ca323e58a3,7EA97A6ED4C7,It's that time of year again. The election of the president of the United States! But does our vote really matter? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ad678ceb5394,7EA97A6ED4C7,the Electoral College does all the voting anyway. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+384739a74006,7EA97A6ED4C7,"To commence, the Electoral College is pretty much the way the president is elected. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+91a73c140a68,7EA97A6ED4C7,"There are currently 538 electors in the Electoral College (Source 1). And in order to win the presidency you need to have at least 270 electoral votes. But why is it like that? In the 2000 U.S. election Al Gore had more popular votes than George W. Bush did nationwide. But he lost the election because Bush had 271 electoral votes compared to Gore's 266 (Source 2). The Electoral College is widely known for being unfair but, there is a reason for that. Number 1 is the Certainty of Outcome. It's less likely to dispute over the popular vote than it is than the electoral vote. The reason is because of the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. (Source 3). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+443de57fcef9,7EA97A6ED4C7,"On the other hand, some Americans have five reasons to keep our horrendous way to elect our president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dc4c3ba132aa,7EA97A6ED4C7,"A Certainty of outcome. It is stated in Source 3 that it is less likely to have a dispute of electoral votes than popular votes. And it's because of the winning candidate's share of popular votes. Everyone's President. It's stated that the Electoral College requires to a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. The South and Northeast region don't have enough electoral votes to elect a president. So Romney had no incentive of campaining in the South. Swing states. The winner-take-all method is popular in each state in the U.S. Giving the winning candidate to win the presidency. The ""toss-up"" states are more likely to pay more attention to the campaign. 4 Big states. Larger states are more likey to have more electoral votes than smaller states. In contrast, Florida and Wyoming. Florida has 29 and Wyoming with only a mere 3 electoral votes. Avoid run-off elections. The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eb60be15ca5c,7EA97A6ED4C7,"there is no need to change the Electoral College to popular votes. Although, many Americans despise the way it works. It still manages to elect a president in an unfair way. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1685aacfe328,7EE7A20BBBD4,"Walking into the voting booth ""...every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November"" (Office Of Federal Register 6), the people of the United States of America expect their vote to count. Although, the president is elected in a more indirect way, by the electoral college, which does not represent the people, and is not fair ",Lead,Effective,,,
+398590fb7a01,7EE7A20BBBD4,"The president should be elected by popular vote from now on. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+66e700e80f6c,7EE7A20BBBD4,The first problem that the electoral college faces is the fact that it does not truly represent the opinion of the people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b38736567c42,7EE7A20BBBD4,"First, voters can walk into the booth and ""...get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate"" (Plumer 10). Not every voter is educated on exactly how the electors and candidates are represented on the ballot and that may lead to an accidental win. On top of this misconception, almost decietfully, an elector promised to a candidate can change their vote at a moments notice(Plumer 10). Even Posner who writes for the electoral college admitted that it is possible, and he claims that it is ""rare"";however, it has happened before in 1960 (Plumer 11), and not even Posner can control the actions of an elector, legally anyway. Also, when a candidate wins a popular vote, which is the true mind of the people, that candidate still may not win the electoral vote, overall, loosing the election. This happened just a few years back in the 2000 election between President Bush and Gore(Posner 16).All in all, the electoral college does not represnt the people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a833102275b7,7EE7A20BBBD4,"Looking deeper into the subject, elections by the electoral college are not fair. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a0c33789e54b,7EE7A20BBBD4,"The first example appears in the method of the ""...""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate""(Office of Federal Register 7). Because of this system, Presidential candidates may not feel the need to campaign to all people, just those of the states with the highest amount of electoral votes(Plumer 13). This goes against the american concept of ""all men are created equal"", leaving voters feeling undervauled and not important. Second, ""A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538- is an even number.."" (Posner 18). Although this tie is claimed to be ""highly unlikely"". However, an election by popular vote would make the conundrum even further unlikely by the general logic of the fact that it is a lot less possible for the opinion of an entire nation to be split down the middle than that of 538 electors. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+265c32a738bb,7EE7A20BBBD4,Another issue with a tie in the electoral college lies in how that draw is resolved. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bdfe56fbb884,7EE7A20BBBD4,"The  tie-breaker is left to the representatives in congress, and ""Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming...would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California..."" (Plumer 12). This simply does not give all the voters equal say in who wins the election. All of these topics and more compressed together represent how un fair the election truly is. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2c566df12667,7EE7A20BBBD4,"Entering the booth next election day, dont only think about who you are voting for, but also how you are voting for them. It makes all the difference, and, ultimately, the popular way is the best way.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1dee985ed5ec,7EEAB865D2C9,Have you ever thought you seen something and you look really close and it's something else? Or have you thought something was one thing but it was different? That's what they think happend with Mars. They think there is aliens and that aliens are making faces. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b079572c1f1c,7EEAB865D2C9,"I think people are going crazy. People are watching to many cartoons and they are starting to think that aliens are real. People on talk shows, books, and magazines are talking about it. There is a face on mars and they think it's aliens creating them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d1f50650bcdb,7EEAB865D2C9,I think they it just happend from natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a0e53654f48,7EEAB865D2C9,"To me it looks like an Egyptian-style pyramid. I didn't see any aliens in the photograph. There aren't homes where they could live. At first scientists thought that it was a Martian mesa, because that is common around that area. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbd6b9261c9c,7EEAB865D2C9,"I think that people need to go up to mars and really see what is going on. So, we can go and show everyone this there aren't any aliens, and they are just a myth. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+16d83e6c5a77,7EEC3E21D0C6,"
+I honestly think cell phones should be aloud in schools during and extra time ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9302012448c5,7EEC3E21D0C6,"like if you have any family that live far away or and friends that live far away, you would want to get in touch with them or see what they have been up to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c9970acf68b,7EEC3E21D0C6,"I have a cousin that in in the marines right now, but he broke is ankle in training so he is staying in California until it heals back up, and it is hard to talk to him, so the only time i really get to talk to him is on the computer on my cell phone, and on holidays and he says it is so amazing on how much i have changed over the years. I have a friend that lives in Colorado and we used to hang out all the time but ever since he moved we haven't talked that much, that is why i think cell phones should be aloud. You have a friend he/or she moves and you grow apart from one another. That's how you loose friends not being able to talk to them while you are in school. That is my statement on why i think phones should be aloud during school during extra time and between classes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e607ba9c67f,7EEC3E21D0C6,"My parents even think cell phones should be aloud during school, because they want to get in touch with us when they need to, to see what we are doing, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+943874b805ed,7EEC3E21D0C6,"ask us what we are going to do after school, tell them what time to pick us up all of this stuff is a reason or reasons for being able to use or cell phones during school ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e95d92e3cbb6,7EEC3E21D0C6,"But i understand that some parents and school principles are taking them out of school class rooms or even the whole campus, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+022abdc51e32,7EEC3E21D0C6,"one parent was talking to my parents about the cell phone policy and they said the reason i don't want cell phones to be aloud is because before i got my child a cell phone he was making straight A's in all of his classes but now he is making B's and
+
+C's in his classes my parents told them that they under stand their reason for not wanting the cell phones during classes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96189339d4cd,7EEC3E21D0C6,Their could be alot of arguments for the cell phone policy in schools. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+541364bbc6c1,7EEC55B04308,I think the community service is a wonderful idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a08292d0d85,7EEC55B04308,The children should know that littering is a bad idea. I'm sure that they would want a clean community and have something nice around them. Some littering can cause bad air quality. That just depends on the litter ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e48bd0b62f65,7EEC55B04308,Also it's better to have a nice environment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59fdfec897b2,7EEC55B04308,"If i had things to do that was not been told, i' d be picking up litter and many things for the community would look nice when people are passing by ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68eee7346ac2,7EEC55B04308,Also it doesn't take that much time is others are helping ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a0bbe8f821f,7EEC55B04308,"The when everything is cleaned up, that's when you can do anything the children wants. Like for example: play in the dirt, run around, play with the equipments that's around there community, or listen to music and other many playful games ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4a0b38af757,7EEC55B04308,Well that's all i think about how you should require all students to participate in the community service. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ca800afce619,7F01B2A58AF8,"We have a big conflict containing the electoral college, Im debating on what we should do ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b72e1ab87979,7F01B2A58AF8,"Im all in favor for keeping the electoral college, Instead of going by the most popular vote. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d7eeefb1e528,7F01B2A58AF8,The most popular vote can be very difficult because the citizens that are voting are just choosing mostly perhaps they dont even know whats going on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca5c58c9983f,7F01B2A58AF8,"They choose based on favoritism and that shouldnt be the case, when you're choosing something so important like this, you have to know the facts about that person and what they're willing to do for us as a whole. Theres a million reasons why the most popular vote shouldn't be even recommended for this, its unnecissariy It should never be based on favoritism its about what they bring to the table. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+492bde792714,7F01B2A58AF8,The electoral college is widely known as an anachronism. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3d731051e7c0,7F01B2A58AF8,"I have my opinion they have theres, their gonna give you opinions  about how unfair the electoral college is when in reality its not anything thats gonna harm you. Perhaps i think its safer then choosing someone that you have no idea about the decisions they wanna make. Yes people may no be that much interested in politics because their not involved that much. They have to do whatever it takes so our nation can be a great one. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7efe130bb130,7F01B2A58AF8,"Leaving our nation in someone hands that doesnt really know what their doing is completely absurd. Do you know how bad that will make our nation look if we had one? I would be ashamed to claim this as my ""Home"". ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2f476eea1e88,7F2C6238F4AA,I'm not in favor of keeping the electoral college or changing the election by popular vote for the president of the united states ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fb349927f565,7F2C6238F4AA,"because i've been informed that when we vote for our candidate, we are actually voting for our candidate's electors ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+30ec9802e0a5,7F2C6238F4AA,"the electoral college is a process, not a place. Our founding fathers had established this in the constitution as a comprise between election of the president. as said the electoral college consists of 538 electors. each candidate running for president has his or her own group of electors. 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The electorals are generally chosen by the candidates political party, but varys by the state laws on what their responsibility are. Presidental election are held every 4 years on the tuesday after the first monday in november. we help choose our state electors when we vote for our president. most states have a ""winner takes all"" system that awards all electors the the winnig candidate. After the election, our state governor prepares a "" Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your sate with the electors too. so when we vote for our candidiate, then we are really votiong their electors. It should be that we just vote for our candidate and that be just that. the electors do the vote for their candidate, with our votes that we put for our candidate.
+
+Richard Nixion, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. chamber of commerce, and the AFL-CIO all the one the that they agree on. And its that answer i had in the begining. To be against the electoral college. They want to abolish the electoral college. But they are not alone. In 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks to the quirks of  the electoral college-won the popular vote, but lost the presidency. over 60 percent would perfer the direct election. Whats with the electoral college you may ask? Voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. I want to know who picks the electors in the first place? It really depends on the state who decides. One other thing about the electoral college is that they are unfair to voters. During 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all. and voters in 25 of the largest media market didn't get to see not even a single campaign ad. So it is official. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality.
+
+The electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non democratic method of selecting a president that is to be by declaring the candidiate who was givien the most popular votes the winner. There is said ti be five reasons for retaining the electoral college. 1. Certainty of Cutcome, 2. Everyone's President, 3. Swing States, 4. Big States, 5. Avoid Run-Off Elections. its an arguement that the electoral college method of selecting the president may be turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. Democrats in texas, for example or Republicans in california. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f6e78356dd7,7F2C6238F4AA,"So as you can see the reason of what i had put down, the electoral college is one that im not in favor of because it being not fair. and the fact that we are voting for the elector, not the candidates who are running for president. wish that you can see it from my point of view ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f3a886348815,7F62201FA024,"Pardon me, but i would like to disagree with you. What the picture acually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. The Face on Mars is just a natural land form. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+b77b20309d31,7F62201FA024,The Face on Mars is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb399873c801,7F62201FA024,"Just like we have many lanforms here on Earth, infact there is a lanform in Idaho. It is located in The Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain, is what reminds me most of the Face on the planet Mars. We have more lanforms like the Face on Mars in the American West. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97fe3dc87c21,7F62201FA024,Conspiracy theorists say that the people of NASA are hiding the evidence of life on Mars. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+43f6f7979f4b,7F62201FA024,"I mean think about about it, why would we hide evidence that would benefit this whole organization? Most of the people here at NASA wish that there was an early civilization on Mars. If we did find life on Mars we would share it world wide, it would be one of the greates scientic breakthroughs in history. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d73009295b2c,7F62201FA024,"Do you understand what I am saying? The Face on Mars was just a Natural land form, not a monument built by aliens. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b06dca0c6dea,7F63036D0C59,"Inflexibility is one of the most common sources of failure for most people in large organizations. Public schools happen to be classified as large organizations, so the statistic mentioned previously obviously applies. Many students have a difficult time at a physical school, whether it be from medical problems, social anxiety, or even if they are just away on personal leave. Advancements in technology have helped to solve these difficulties at school, such as: easily-accessible internet, affordable personal computers, and large-scale organization software like Microsoft's Office 365. These advancements make up a new kind of education: virtual schooling ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9b654f0b1cfe,7F63036D0C59,Virtual schooling allows students to access the same education as physical students while being away from the actual school. Schools should utilize this new type of schooling ,Position,Effective,,,
+6f9fd900bd46,7F63036D0C59,for students who cannot attend school due to medical problems ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5f5709b1ca61,7F63036D0C59,students who are stressed by a public environment ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d270624b5589,7F63036D0C59,students who are away from school due to a large-scale world events. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c3b3cd765c6c,7F63036D0C59,"Medical issues can frequently cause students to miss school and fall behind the other students in terms of their studies. While they are usually acquitted from late penalties, students with many health issues usually have to make up schoolwork on their own time, after the medical treatment has concluded ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c8ffd1512dc2,7F63036D0C59,"With online schooling, students can complete lessons and assignments while recovering from a treatment in the hospital, offsetting the amount of schoolwork that they have to make up for later. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+64d95f368e32,7F63036D0C59,"Without online schooling, recovering students do not really utilize their time in the hospital, usually using cellular devices or other forms of entertainment. However, with online schooling, students can utilize their time efficiently, to save time and effort that would hurt them later. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d2262b9f8cc,7F63036D0C59,"Along the lines on medical issues, some students have social or mental disorders that bar them from attending school like a neurotypical student would. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cef72d27b289,7F63036D0C59,"Disorders like Social Anxiety or Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD) can cause some students extreme stress under a social environment. Online school is a remedy for this, as it allows these students to access the same classes, but under a much less stressful environment. These students would also perform better online, as the negative stress that would otherwise affect their grades would be missing; therefore, with online schooling, students with social or mental disorders would perform better in terms of grades and attendance. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+502bba01e1cf,7F63036D0C59,Large-scale world events can also cause students to miss school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+70d50262c560,7F63036D0C59,"With these large-scale events, it it usually large groups of students that are affected, with some events causing an entire school system to shut down. For example, in early 2020, there has been a viral pandemic of a certain Coronavirus, with Asia and Europe most affected by it. In Italy, school have been shut down across the country, including schools affiliated with the U.S. Military Overseas School Program. One high school that has been shut down has began to utilize online schooling with video chat features for lecturing. All students at the school utilize the online schooling program, so that their school year is not interrupted by the pandemic. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+768665da1360,7F63036D0C59,"Although some schools still do not have online schooling options, the ones who do show massive benefits at little cost to the schools or students. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23ba18597f15,7F63036D0C59,"Some might say that online schooling is just another expense to the school, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0d42643f0386,7F63036D0C59,although that argument has little foundation. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+42ca0aee6d7d,7F63036D0C59,Most software for online schooling costs very little and the local governments have no problem funding them. The benefits definitely outweigh the costs of online schooling. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d2ad951c214,7F63036D0C59,"As the world becomes more technologically advanced, online schools have become more prominent at a high school and college level. Online school provides education to those who cannot attend a physical school, whether it be from medical issues, social issues, or mental issues. Large-scale closings of school due to world events are also remedied by online schooling, keeping school going while the physical school is shut down temporarily. These benefits outweigh the minimal cost of online schooling. The low cost and high reward of online schooling definitely benefit both the student and the school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7fb4453d49a2,7F6795CE405C,I think students can be benefit ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b4fe391b1432,7F6795CE405C,"because they can have more time, if they have job ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d03f7b8b824,7F6795CE405C,"they need an extra class but, they could not be or stay after school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f618a8ffbb6e,7F6795CE405C,they just cannot come to school for personals reasons ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b68a293ee84,7F6795CE405C,"First,student from high school much of them have a job and they need take class at home ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+46e8597d177d,7F6795CE405C,just for three hours and then rest to get ready to their job. They also can have time to do homework it's how it can be easy for them to study more and have a grade and graduate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a23c10a112dd,7F6795CE405C,"Second, if they are almost to finish high school, but they just need a credit and they don't want to be in school just for one class they should take that class online and have more time; 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbf26a735d9d,7F6795CE405C,"it can be for homework or they go to visit another place but they cannot missing that class because they need that credit and grade for graduation. What about they can not stay after school but they need that grade they can take that online while they're at home. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c33336234495,7F6795CE405C,"Third, if the person have deformity they could not walk, or just don't want to come to school for different reason most be bullying, they can be benefit with the online class so they can get they class done and fine what they want to be in their future, also can have their graduation. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+617b2c9751c7,7F6795CE405C,"I really think those are the reason why they can be benefit with the online classes they have more time for homework, job, rest, and visit others place, and also they get the grade that they need that is how they're benefit. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+65077afd3378,7F89720B3C67,"After reading this article ""Does the Electoral College Work?"" I've come to believe that we should keep the Electoral College because, look at all the rights and goods we have establish untill now. What im trying to say is that the Electoral College do work, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a78b0b632376,7F89720B3C67,or example This method is widely regarded as an anachronism ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73f83aef7cae,7F89720B3C67,"Also that it can still be a elcetion, ""it is entirely possible that the winner of the election vote will not win the national popular vote,"" so I believe its fair on both sides. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d51d1e607d16,7F89720B3C67,"It happen in 2000, with Bush and Gore where Gore had more popular votes than Bush but less electoral votes, and we all know would won that year. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d41accd8b59a,7F89720B3C67,"The Electoral College do has it cons for example, the voters actually vote for a slate of electors and not for the president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0590f7333a31,7F89720B3C67,"So if you live in a state like Texas for example, your votes goes to 34 Democratic electors that you don't know and this can create confusion about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. The best argument about the electoral college is the disaster factor. It happen once in 1960 where ""Louisianna legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who oppose John F. kennedy,"" Which means that those popular votes for Keenedy would not actually gone to him. Bob Dole says the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+332739fd3469,7F89720B3C67,"In despised of the Electoral College cons, here is five reasons of keeping this method of choosing our President. Certainty of Outcome, Everyone's President, Swing States, Big states, and Avoid run-off elections. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d0061aad82d0,7F89720B3C67,"With these five reasons the electoral college allows us to ""restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution..."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+baece2cd7863,7F89720B3C67,"also you can say that it has been working for as all as it has been here with us, so why abolish something if its working.           ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6af143c1c9e,7F8D472D06A1,The Face on Mars is just a natural land that is forming on Mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8b62bdeefa86,7F8D472D06A1,The Face is seen when Viking snap the pictures. Global Survey spacecraft was the one that really reveal the Face and what its really was. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e52262f897bd,7F8D472D06A1,Global survey announced to the public that the Face was a mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e09763802f2b,7F8D472D06A1,"Many also believe and say that it looks like Egyptian Pharaoh. Inaddition, people engage to the public and attract attention to Mars. So, humans made it become a pop icon and starred in a Hollyood film,appeared in books,magazines,and radio talk shows. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c40d2d4d6fbc,7F8D472D06A1,The Face on Mars is just a regular landforming and not created by the aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b346daa98192,7F8D472D06A1,Even if it looks like Egyptian Pharaoh or mesa there were is no proof of life on Mars to create the face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d913db299494,7F8D472D06A1,"When Mars Orbiter Camera team snap pictures it was ten time sharper than the original Viking photos¨. This means that when Viking snap the picture it was not as clear as this one. Then, when it is not clear you assume something by the way it shape like in this situation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7eb2a51deec,7F8D472D06A1,"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West¨( Garvin,article 12 ). ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8cdd81933c16,7F8D472D06A1,"The Face looks like it was created by aliens but why does every landform on Earth looks like it is created by aliens.¨the camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. Perhaps, aliens marking were hidden by haze¨( Skeptics,article 8 ). Yes, it may has ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7a175dbaa1b2,7F8D472D06A1,"but this camera has the best pixal size and they could see everything.¨ As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixal size¨( Garvin,article11 ) ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fbaa4a7be15e,7F8D472D06A1,There is not yet evidence on Mars to proof that aliens are in fact living on Mars. This landform on Mars is just like what we had on the past years on Earth.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+713f139796fb,801C34D883FD,"Imagine walking into a classroom where as soon as the teacher turns to the white board the students pull out phones and other devices and begin using them. Because they are allowed to have phones during free times they can't get into as much trouble for having such things on. Have you ever tried talking to someone who is texting and they don't even respond?
+
+Despite many pleas about how it would cut down on texts during class, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f99e0c52be60,801C34D883FD,I believe the no phones at all during school to make much more sense. ,Position,Effective,,,
+06d0b36bdad3,801C34D883FD,The no phones condition would make the school not responsible for any stolen phones ,Claim,Effective,,,
+863a0d25ffcf,801C34D883FD,"stop almost all texting during class 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+1ca7ed706251,801C34D883FD,and make test scores higher. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+78ad4ef43c14,801C34D883FD,"
+In our school I have sometimes seen problems where kids will steal each others stuff including phones, if the teachers or kids don't know who stole it or can't get it back the I can see many an angered parent suing the district or the school.
+
+I know for a fact that I have once suffered as I thought someone had stolen my phone and I wouldn't get it back, I knew that if I would tell a teacher the whole class would be punished until someone came forward and even then my parents would be mad unless that person would get suspended or expelled. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+89d4cb420bd8,801C34D883FD,"I know that in the district handbook said it wouldn't be responsible for any lost items but if you allow kids to bring electronics to school you are making yourself responsible. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0757ba6b9970,801C34D883FD,This would also cut down on texting during class as if children are caught with a phone even in their pocket they would be in trouble. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+de2c7bd7a15b,801C34D883FD,"Once before in Spanish class I was caught texting but it was only because the phone was in my hand that my teacher could prove it, had I slipped the phone into my backpack as I saw her coming she would have no reason to think that I had been texting in her class beside vague suspicion. Another thing it would do is if a teacher heard a phone ring in class they used to go easy on people because their only fault might have been forgetting to turn it off. With this new policy in place kids could be punished just for having it there not just on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc695001ff65,801C34D883FD,Another good thing no phones would do would to make test scores higher. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ab6e73a06c41,801C34D883FD,"Without as much distraction caused by drama such as how 'PROPER_NAME and PROPER_NAME are dating' or 'how cute is so-and-so' they would be able to focus more in class, learn more and test better. The other thing is kids wouldn't have it as easy if they wanted to cheat on tests and therefore make their tests invalid. For any school that strives to make itself better a 'No Phone' policy would help them a lot. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3c695447f178,801C34D883FD,Though there are many people who say letting people use phones in free time would cut down on texting ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+edbfdf60d55f,801C34D883FD,I disagree for many reasons. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7a9a0b9ea442,80619550D955,I think that community service is very important and students need to be reminded of that. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+3d0b5ed2e4d4,80619550D955,But its also very time consuming so I believe students should have a choice. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ad21984b5fb0,80619550D955,You should get parents and community members to sponsor a club for community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab57cae0218e,80619550D955,"It could be named ASCC or After School Community Cleanup. I personally think the whole problem behind community service with kids is that they believe that it can only be cleaning up litter and such, but we need to remind them that it can also be going to a nursing home or putting on a concert for kids with cancer in the area. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cd7c49cd1bb,80619550D955,Not only would this help out the community but it could be a way to socialize out of school and do work at the same time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62de1bf54cde,80619550D955,"Just imagine if the track and field area had no litter at all, if there were multiple trash cans instead of three or four, or even helping make a second loop to pickup children. But see not all children might be able to participate as needed because either they are too little, have a sport, have a doctors appointment or even be allergic to the material your working with. If you do decide to put this club into action Tuesday and Thursday right after school would probably be the most effective and convenien ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+63a73198fd75,80619550D955,"This is just some of my ideas, so just think about it. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+65a99c36721f,80875397FA07,I believe policy 2 will be much better. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1f0f12f9e0fa,80875397FA07,"Phones shouldn't be used in school at all except for lunch, because while your in class because they will end up using there phones instead of getting a proper education. They will also distract others from learning when they are not using there phones. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+928eb0926851,80875397FA07,"They shouldn't really even have it during lunch at all, everything will be a disaster. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d3ab003fbb1,80875397FA07,Most people wont even have it off during the classes they will just have them on as long as it doesn't make any sound in class ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bde79fa64dfc,80875397FA07,Students should have there phone during school because if there is am emergency that couldn't even call the office they should have there phones on vibrate. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+065e4d5d0865,80875397FA07,"If they use there phones during school it just wouldn't work out, every one would stop paying attention during classes and when the teacher, principle, or staff is talking to them they would not pay attention. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a3829b578e8,80875397FA07,"Even for the school assembly's or games they would not pay attention and just be on the phones regularly. The parents would get mad for the students not getting an education, and possibly fail there classes. Parents will get furious and file a complaint. If there phones go on in class teacher, and students will get distracted for the people who want to learn and will not get there education. When people try to study at the library they will pretend to study but use the phone when the test comes will not no what to do. When they are taking a math test they will cheat by using there phone as a calculator. While the teacher is on the board they will start to use there phones and not learn anything. While they are going to a class they will be on the phone, what if there was stares and they were to pay attention to the fall and trip or fall? they would really injured and school would be held responsible. While they are walking if they hit someone you never no if someone will find it like if you hit them on purpose and try to hit you back. In the morning when there waiting for the bell to ring and there on the phones when the bell does ring they would be late to class and just lie to the teacher and do it again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b57959addd9,80875397FA07,"So this is why i think we should not use are phones during school hours. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea4cf3a2f64d,80D39980B802,"The Electoral college is something that has been around for hundreds of years, and has helped us decide what to do. It is a fair method of electing the president, but it is not what we need anymore. Times have changed since that was established, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d2fafd7c7755,80D39980B802,"it is time we use a good old-fashioned way of voting, and use election by popular vote. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+24efde218a9d,80D39980B802,"Back in the seventeenth century, when the Electoral College was created to find a balance between citizen voting and majority vote. How it works, is we select the electors representing our state's votes, they meet and vote, and then congress counts their votes. Also, all states, except Maine and Nebraska have something called the ""winner-take-all"" syatem, and that is a ""system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.""(s1,p7) But now, the citizens in your state who qualify as a voter cast their votes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a24d9ded3883,80D39980B802,"Instead of that being what our state's choice is, we choose the electors of our candidate, or person we voted for, and then the candidate with the majority votes wins, getting atleast 270 out of 538 electoral votes. This seems very unfair ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+443cb675cb79,80D39980B802,"and in one specific case, it is. In the 2000 presidential election, between Al Gore and George Bush, Al Gore got more popular votes than George Bush; he should have won. But Bush had more electoral votes, and that was where is mattered. So, Bush won that. If Gore won popularity wise, he should have won, hense creating happier citizens, since he won the majority of their votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05c415ab1312,80D39980B802,"Another argument, according to source 3, paragraph 23, is that the Electoral College method of choosing the president, ""may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+29b996f3468f,80D39980B802,"This is very important, as we all want a good leader who will support our home state. If, for example, the Electoral College voted on a Democrat, and he won, Florida may not have much hope. Florida is a Republic state, as is most of the southern states; yes, Mr. President would be obligated to help all 50 states when necessary, but the bigger benefits would go towards the Democratic states, and probably his home state ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98160b5110be,80D39980B802,"Therefore, voters may not even bother casting in a ballot if the candidate of their choice does not have much hope, or if they think either potential leader will benefit them. So if they do not have much of a choice in the matter, they lose interest and shrug it off, as opposed to if it were popular vote, and every single vote was accounted for. Fortunately, though, this does not happen often; one meesly vote does not do much to turn the tables. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1299e92c7078,80D39980B802,"The Electoral College, all-in-all, has helped us a lot, yes, but it is high time we go back to the popularity vote. It would make most citizens, and many potential voters, happier to know that they are accounted for, and we won't have the potential of the popularity winner, the one the people actually voted for, to lose on account of the electors. It should be the people of America's decision, not a group of government workers, to decide who runs our nation ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ff8077d960eb,80F8A9574B21,i think that you should change the electoral collage. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+cac0432316e3,80F8A9574B21,"the foundin fathers establish it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by popular vote of qualified citizens.""  in which that if we been doing this for century the people votes never really mattered because voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. well i didnt know people need some  for some one to turn back around and they deside who they want to vote for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a2aa3f77cd9,80F8A9574B21,its stupid and a waste of people times because sometimes you cant control who your electors vote for. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5c6472bbbb0,80F8A9574B21,"the single best argument against the electrol collages."" they would call it the disaster factor the reason for that is the american people should consider them self lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century ; the system allows much worse, consider that states legislaturs are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors i "" could always defy the will of the people."" proving my point making the peoples votes useless. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1f89b623f388,80F8A9574B21,"they did this in 1960 , segregationists in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with new electors who oppose john F. kennedy. so that a popular vote for kennedy would not have actually gone to kennedy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+660f88c30278,80F8A9574B21,people votes should actually matter senator and not be use to vote for some one else to vote so they can end up choosing some one else. so please stop electoral collage. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bc52dcd01b27,80FC88FA6032,"Do you think it was made by an alien or is it a natural landform? Many people have different opinions some say aliens created it, but others say that is a natural thing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0d823184e2b1,80FC88FA6032,In my opinion I think that it's a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fb146f09ae50,80FC88FA6032,"I have 3 examples, first when the camera captured the picture it wasen't clear enough because there were wispy clouds. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e4c1451fca3,80FC88FA6032,"Second in the artical it said ""it spotted shadowy likeness of a human face"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e896c8069ba0,80FC88FA6032,"Third the artical aslo said ""formed by shadows giving the illusison of eyes, nose, and mouth. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+330cb30d3c6e,80FC88FA6032,"First the camera captured the picture, but it wasen't clear enough because when they captured the picture there were wispy cloud which can make it hard to take a picture or to see the picture. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b8635636974d,80FC88FA6032,"This example shows that they might of seen something else such as the face ,but it could be wrong because they captured the picture when there was wispy clouds. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+74c95884e08a,80FC88FA6032,"Second in the artical it said ""it spotted shadowy likeness of a human face"" which can mean that when the picture was captured the camera could have of captured some shadows to which can create an illusion of a face when in reality it could be the showdows. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce0aadb725a5,80FC88FA6032,This example shows that the camera captured the shadows which can create and illusion of a face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d51b84f41055,80FC88FA6032,"Third in the artical it also said that ""formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. This can mean that people see it in many way's. the picture creates an illusion that can make you think that it's a face with eyes, nose, and mouth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+554684490990,80FC88FA6032,"This example shows that the picture wasn't taken right which can cause an illusion, many people see a face, but that's because the picture creates an illusion of a face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+09f13e1cb957,80FC88FA6032,"In conclusion many people have different opinions some say aliens created it, but say is a natural landform. Some people may have counter calims first counter claim is why would NASA lie to us. Second counter claim is that the picture showed a face so it is a face. Third counter claim is that they had a good camera so if it shows it then it is a face. My rebuttals would be that NASA is not lieing about the pictures. Second the picture might create an illusion that makes you think it's a face. Third not all cameras show exactly what you want to take a picture of these are my counter claims and rebuttals and also my example and explanantions ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f0db96308fb,8102E7EE3D09,"The electoral college is described in many ways. It is described as needed, useful and helpful ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ba1c77daab02,8102E7EE3D09,"I think it is described as unfair, outdated, and irrational ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f2e4c5703ac4,8102E7EE3D09,"I describe it this way because majority votes do not really ""count"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a986703a0d81,8102E7EE3D09,has been used for three hundred years ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cf38b7e33c8,8102E7EE3D09,and it is just more time taken to vote for our president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ae641ee30964,8102E7EE3D09,"We just vote for representatives to go vote for the president. Many people would have won by majority vote, but the electoral college had more votes for the other side. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b71a10ccee73,8102E7EE3D09,"The Founding Fathers used it when they were alive. I think that America is a little past that, because that was three hundred years ago. Why still use something that old? It is pretty irrational to still use the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0f8e1a05e99,8102E7EE3D09,Even other Americans believe that the election should be based off of majority vote. Sixty percent of them believe that to be true! The electoral college is a waste of time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8584edfa1091,8102E7EE3D09,"All in all, the electoral college is just a waste of time, and process. It takes to long for the president to be voted in. It also makes no sense because our votes dont even count. Most of us believe it should go away, by majority vote,too ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3abe5a60e76e,8103123D75BC,Electoral College is unfair ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4cfae35b366e,8103123D75BC,"If you only have a couple of Democratic electors than the vote that everyone in Ohio , Alaska , South Carolina , is pointless and would only count for a couple of votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+684f6e81b5f4,8103123D75BC,"The fact that Electors can refuse to vote for a president and the party their on what the people picked that elector for is ridiculous, because the Elector could just pick the President on the Republican side. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9ee40f1d510,8103123D75BC,"Electoral Vote can be easily
+
+Manipulated by the state legislature by ""replacing the Democratic electors with electors who would oppose the President. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a85928b2c21,8103123D75BC,"If a candidate only went to a place that has a lot of electoral votes and he knew those people were gonna pick for the Democrats then he basically has a huge advantage, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+768b375cefb8,8103123D75BC,"if the Republican candidate got a bunch of other states with 3-6 electoral votes then it gonna take him alot more states to catch up to the Democrat who only need California to boost him up
+
+Tremendously 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3202cef77bd1,8103123D75BC,"The 3 states a candidate needs most to win is
+
+California
+
+Texas
+
+Florida
+
+If the Democrats got those 3 states by 122 electoral votes. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce6605ab41ca,8103123D75BC,The winner-takes-all rule is horrible ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22b44f53e137,8103123D75BC,it should be however many votes that candidate had so if Mitt Romney had the most electoral votes in California it shouldn't mean that he wins all the electoral votes it should just mean that he gets the 33 votes and Obama gets the other 22 votes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ddd26ed423f6,8103123D75BC,"Im in favor of either taking out Electoral votes or just making adjustments to it , so it's more fair for the people that are voting.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6fcc017c4781,811DE32FCE53,"I do not like the Electoral College. The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. It's basically a winner-take-all system in each state. Especially with California it represents 35 million voters and if they are really close and have a tight margin the winning side of the votes takes it all, which means all the 55 representative votes go for that one side. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c37410d16d90,811DE32FCE53,getting rid of it would be fantastic ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d9dca65293be,811DE32FCE53,"e could have other options on having a better vote system that is more accurate and fair to the the people/voters. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+15da3a6a0fc2,811DE32FCE53,"First of all, an example of this could be Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. Like almost all cases award electoral votes on a winner-take-all, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. Thr popular vote was very close in Florida; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in Wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1593e919bf2,811DE32FCE53,"
+Secondly, this is not the greatest way to vote because first the voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, which in turn elect the president ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7117d34c2952,811DE32FCE53,"If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for Kerry, you'd vote for the slate of 34 Democratic electors won the statewide election, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president which wouldn't be what the voters want in some cases. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65b48f5f2d79,811DE32FCE53,"Third, according to the Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now ",Claim,Effective,,,
+faa50eda986a,811DE32FCE53,Next election the voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner couldagain lose the presidency. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5c0ba3d46c15,811DE32FCE53,"yet, the electoral college still has its defenders. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+baee5951b1f9,811DE32FCE53,"The Electoral college is not the best way to choose, it has minimum chances of succeeding in the future. I think a direct vote would work the best for the voters but yet the the electoral college has its cons. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4c50cce4cf72,811DE32FCE53,"Conclusively, the Electoral College is not the best way to vote. By a bare minimum margin of votes, it could cost the election for the other canidate. The bigger state could be a catastrophy and it would be unfair. Last, the Electoral College is irrational, outdated, and unfair for the most part with its winner-takes-all.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e349c6da2657,815D2A09CF1B,"Boom! Tire blows. Only if the driverless car, supposly a smart car, senn the road construction ahead it could of prevented the accident. Then the sensors for the cars I know will take weeks to put all of them in to properly work. Also how is it suppose to be a smart car when you still have to hold the wheel at all times. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ff9f57b59a83,815D2A09CF1B,"Although it might have some positives about the car, it still has a numerous number of negitives such as ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f7bada33da68,815D2A09CF1B,if the driverless car goes to fast do you get a ticket and have to pay or what is the consequences. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65a9c00c2225,815D2A09CF1B,"First and foremost, the sensors on the smart cars ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2e1e1d11dca4,815D2A09CF1B,"It must take a fortune to buy and apply every single little sensor thats need daily on the rode. Plus it must take alot of people to do that and you have to pay them a lot as well so that means you're going to spend so much money that you're going to try and sell it for a huge price of change that no one has to spend. Or the timing, it probably take one/fourth of the time it take to make that robot car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c0d268d14c9,815D2A09CF1B,"
+Moreover, you have to keep your hands on the wheel at all times. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+67661ead8561,815D2A09CF1B,"What if you're taking a rode trip and you want to get some rest, you can't because your handle has to be positioned on the wheel at all times. Also if you have a important meating and you are trying to finish up your presentation,you can't. Eventhough it might do some incredible things but it aslo can mouth-function and leave you stranded. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+83f393c96b74,815D2A09CF1B,"Equally important, what about the laws for the car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+28a2d17a6867,815D2A09CF1B,Most importantly i want to know who gets the ticket and pays for it if the car gets pulled over if going to fast is it you or the manufacturing company. Then it could overide and take far away from where you need to be because the smart car is really like a colassal mobile computer. If it over heats and blows who get blamed for someones death. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e39b466cf97,815D2A09CF1B,"Overall, I disaggre and also disapprove this vehicle. As a driver and owner of a smart car i would rather have it Barren like the ones we drive daily thats less worries. Also cheaper to get fixed and worked on then getting my car reprogramed and a whole new pc system in it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dea2a43a19c8,81745F5FFCB9,"The electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors , the metting of the electors where they vote for presidents and vice president,and counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a465669ab9ca,81745F5FFCB9,You should always keep electoral votes. Would you know for sure who would win ?. .Electoral college is the best way to manage who would be the best. To see who would win out of the two people ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7f0933b14a7e,81745F5FFCB9,"Why wouldnt we use electoral colllege it helps us know that when two people thats running for a spot and they get the same percentage for popular vote you can use electorial vote to see which one each state , country, or city like. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8711805a2e0,81745F5FFCB9,The electorial college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of votes by the cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b5a70001517,81745F5FFCB9,for example when president obama and romney went against each other for president both of them had 51.3 percent so the electoral vote that change it all president obama got 61.3 percent electoral votes compared to 51.3 percent of the pouplar vote. This is the best way for people to know who really winning and won. I think its best for us to use the electoral vote. Its granteed to help with the prsident and the people to know who is really winning. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0616fae71f9d,81745F5FFCB9,The electorial college help you pick your candidate as well. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3516922253f8,81745F5FFCB9,This is for the president to know who would be working for him or her. The best  thing for you to do is keep electorial vote it helps with eveything that you need help with. It also help the president out to .You wouldnt want to go without a president do you. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1667ac54f85f,81745F5FFCB9,The electorial college is a helpful thing it is really needed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a775afc616b3,81745F5FFCB9,I wouldnt take electoral college out. When you cant see who really is winning what you going to do then without it. Are you going to choose for yourself. But then the people is going to be mad and thats not fair. Maybe some people dont like  the opne presidemt and the other people do. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0351da370676,81745F5FFCB9,The eletoral college will tell one of the two people running for president if they would win. And it would help to see who the candidate is. Voters in presidential elections are people whi want to express a political perference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. so therefore you need the electorial vote to decide whether the person really win or not. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7f05011ec94a,81B0FFE6659F,The future is near and the talk about driverless cars is upon us ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a157dd627dc2,81B0FFE6659F,Driverless cars give us the oppertunity to save thousands of dollars in buying cars and paying for repairs. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21e9be3405fa,81B0FFE6659F,"This also would be a lot more flexable than a bus because, the driverless cars could take us to our exact destination ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+13bf7b81253e,81B0FFE6659F,Plus the driverless car idea would use half of the amount of fuel we use today. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e1c6986d576,81B0FFE6659F,"Multiple teens who already stress because of school have to also handle a job on top of that just to buy a car. Some even have to give up activities they love because of their jobs. Adults spend thousands of dollars just to buy cars and then have the risk of having to spend even more money when they break down to repair them. Cars are expensive items and the money we spend on them could go to other things like vacations, bills, and food. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c02646c0aa98,81B0FFE6659F,"Buses today have a certain route they follow on a daily basis. They are only capable of taking you to the closest bus stop to your desired location, this could still be a mile walk away from your destination. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34c29f6f8838,81B0FFE6659F,With driverless cars it would serve to you more as a taxi that takes you where you want to go. This saves us a lot of time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cf2093285c8,81B0FFE6659F,The polution fuel causes would decrease by 50% ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ddc7b225e6f,81B0FFE6659F,The driverless cars are projected to use only half the amount of fuel cars and buses are usuing today. This makes earth a lot healthier and safer to live on for you and your family. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9badfbba22e,81B0FFE6659F,Driverless cars are a great change for the would. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5b8d1df1adca,81B0FFE6659F,"Makes your life a lot cheaper, safer, and saves you a lot of time. The talk of the future is here and the driverless cars are near.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+deabbcb7c123,81B6F6345F55,I feel like driverless cars are an okay idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fbdcb356b307,81B6F6345F55,"in the artical it says that Google has had these types of cars since 2009 and they have been driven half a million miles without a crash, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0799d33a41d,81B6F6345F55,even though they are not actually 100 percent driverless ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+72619e96ffda,81B6F6345F55,"A lot of manufacturers believe that it was not so much the car that needed to be ""smarter"" but the roads. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eadca48e2b51,81B6F6345F55,The cars would have to use a whole lot of sensors to be able to be self driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba1550aaa19e,81B6F6345F55,"it would cost alot of money to get new roads and everything that is needed for the cars. In cars today we have alot of sensors because they help with an abundance of things such as antilock brakes, automatic windows and many more. in the artical it says that BMW in 2013 announced the development of ""Traffic Jam Assistant"". That means that the car could handle driving and functioning at speeds up to 25 miles per hour, as long as the driver had their hands on the wheel. Although the cars can steer, accelerate and break on their own the drivers are still notified when the road ahead requires human assistance. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+03fbe6af4d72,81B6F6345F55,"Many people can argue and say ""wont drivers get bored of waiting for their turn to drive?"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3b384c122fc8,81B6F6345F55,"Although that is a concern the cars arent going to always be self driving, that can be changed with the push of a button or the flip of a switch. the driver can choose when he or she wants to drive and when they want the car to drive its self. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aa1de2e6c078,81B6F6345F55,In many states it has been lawed that the use or attempt to make such cars is illegal ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6c25d3338af3,81B6F6345F55,"but many manufacturers believe that whith in the next few years those laws will be changed, but if those are changed then new laws are going to have to be put in place. Those laws can help a company because the laws would either state that it was the drivers fault if they got hurt in the self driving car or if it was the manufacturers fault for making said car. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+14b1ed7ce7f3,81B6F6345F55,"Either way i believe that the making and use of driverless cars is a pretty good idea because now and days we live in a world where we have to be caught up with the latest and greatest things or we fall behind. The world of technology is evolving and so is human kind, so i believe that driverless cars will be a good addition to this ever changing world of technology.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e80731773f9,81E51029477E,". It clearly states in paragraph 1 why we need to keep the Electoral College there are so many reason why but only one can bring it to staying in the system.""Electoale College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a comprise between election of the President by vote in Congress and elction of the President by a polular vite of quarified citizens"". ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ed62b9450d18,81E51029477E,What i am clearly trying to state is the the Elecotoral College needs to stay in the system. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7123dac3ac99,81E51029477E,"Many people will say different but only in my opinion we need ot keep the Elcectral College, it is part of the Constitution of the United Sates of America if it clearly staes stuff about the Electoal College in the Consistitution then that means you need to keep it in the sistem ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0e2d83fa06c,81E51029477E,to help with all the dier need that the world has to offer for the Electoral College just dont get rid of it for no reason you need to have a really great suggestion to remove it out of the system. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6ab0deef9815,81E51029477E,"All i am trying to say is that in my opinion if you care at all, the we need to keep the Electoral College alive dont just kick it out the system if it sates its name in the Constitution then it need to stay where its at dont delte it from the program just becauss of some stupid process you need a darn good reason to remove it not just because you feel like it thats not good enough you need to show emotion about how the Electoral College is in the Constisution ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43528026ea06,81E51029477E,look at the facts and you will see why i want the it to stay moving and not to be kicked out.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+16fce9582273,81E6FDB0A4BB,"What is the electoral college?  The electoral college is a process which consists of the selection of the electors, meeting where they vote for president, and the counting of the votes.  The real question is, is the electoral college helping us or is it just bringing our government farther towards disaster? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bfef29f470af,81E6FDB0A4BB,The electoral college should be diminished ,Position,Effective,,,
+a67b769a6a20,81E6FDB0A4BB,it is an unfair direct election ,Claim,Effective,,,
+277fd6d38fc6,81E6FDB0A4BB,"the disaster factor. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+1dbd3fc231a4,81E6FDB0A4BB,"To begin, by keeping the electoral college we could avoid run off elections.  This would help our governmental system ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d96e9553b533,81E6FDB0A4BB,"because as noted by Richard A. Posner, ""There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast.""  By keeping the electoral college, we could help resolve run-off elections. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8d6234335ff2,81E6FDB0A4BB,What we dont know is if it will permanantly work for our governmental system and is it worth the risk ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+63471f9100db,81E6FDB0A4BB,"The electors are the ones voting for the president, so we should question whether they should have control to help avoid these run-off elections.  The writer notes, ""... the pressure would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by electoral college..."" (Posner) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99ef69ab228c,81E6FDB0A4BB,"Although that is true, that is only one problem that would be resolved by the electoral college, and olne benefit is outnumbered by the numerous disadvantages to the electoral college. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a189082c5d30,81E6FDB0A4BB,"Moreover, the disaster facor has a huge impact on the electoral collage. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f0051dd72044,81E6FDB0A4BB,"The writer states, ""The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse"" (Plumer).  This disaster was not the first disaster to happen in the system.  According to Plumer, the system has had much more effect and damage on the United States and this should not be repeated again.  The writer also says, ""electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please"" (Plumer).  This goes to show, not only is the electoral college unbeneficial, but they can be sneaky.  The electoral college should be abolished because of the atrocious outcomes it is capable of doing to our government. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a6535e1ed9a6,81E6FDB0A4BB,"Not only is the electoral college capable of the disaster factor, but it also has no direct election.  ",Claim,Effective,,,
+01bb4519ca45,81E6FDB0A4BB,"As stated in ""What Is the Electoral College?"", ""... when you vote for your candidate you are acually voting for your candidate's electors."" (Office of the Federal Register).  This means, voters have no control over whom controls the country.  That is outrageous that the lives of these people will be affected by someone they did not want in the overpowering decisions of their country. Writer Plumer states, ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair too voters"" as well as ""The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" (Plumer).  Both of these point go to show that the electoral college is lowering our hopes for the government.  The writer also notes, ""candidates don't spend time in states they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states"" (Plumer).  This proves that the electoral government thinks about their winning chances instead of our countries government.  Are we going to sit here and let them take advantage of their power that will lead us towards disaster? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b0cb5af9fa49,81E6FDB0A4BB,"All in all, the electoral collage should be banished from the government.  Who wants our government to get weaker and more unfair to the citizens?  By taking away the electoral college our government would gain back its strength and become the hard- working government we know it can be!    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+18065481a354,81F1DBD56E0D,Its a landfrom i tell you ,Position,Adequate,,,
+333cb55ff878,81F1DBD56E0D,But still people don't think it is a landfrom. Its a landfrom there is proof that it is. This eassy is going to explain that it is a landfrom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78129bc33ce8,81F1DBD56E0D,So what it looks like a face many things have that don't mean there is aliens. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+be0730c26d2c,81F1DBD56E0D,"Yes, it would be cool if there were aliens but there not as far as we know there not. How many things have we thing was a face but was some thing else? For exampal there was a toy in my brother room that look like a human face in the dark but it was a pokemon. So why can't these be some thing that looks like a face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cbfdf91c2091,81F1DBD56E0D,They took a lot of photos of it. But that don't mean its a face. NASA figered it out that it was a landfrom the have a very good camira ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e35026693c34,81F1DBD56E0D,"on paragrafh seven it says,""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landfrom. There was no alien monument afther all."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3680868e63f,81F1DBD56E0D,See there is your proof. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5b55f6a4faf0,8248E7E6E2A0,I think that the new rules are kind of bad ,Position,Adequate,,,
+95a3bc486852,8248E7E6E2A0,everyone should get there workout no matter what ! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c202d1ad2fc,8248E7E6E2A0,so kids can stay healthy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df12cea0c01f,8248E7E6E2A0,that's a students free time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+336fd5d66267,8248E7E6E2A0,we get to run around and just be free instead of sitting in the classroom all day long. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39c32f6c9b77,8248E7E6E2A0,Instead of them rules I think they should make a better rule. So we don't have to dress for gym or something at least like that ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+24d8b234d861,8248E7E6E2A0,getting a B average can be hard to do sometimes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f535310427aa,8248E7E6E2A0,if you don't like that pacific class or if your not good at that subject. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9874a0accf2,8248E7E6E2A0,"I think if this does happen students would really be upset because almost everyone likes gym because we do a lot of fun stuff in there and everyone should get a workout so yeah.. I think having gym at school is the most important because that's the only free time we ever get while we are in school.
+
+If we was to end up having gym rules where we couldn't participate only if we had a B average nobody would even want to go to gym because most people don't get A's and B's so the average of people not participating would be horrible!. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b9a774bd7102,828FD0B64062,"I would like to explame the importants of Electoral College. This'll explain what it is,its defenses to the attacks on getting rid of it,and finally why it was created in the first place. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9ef57d51dfe4,828FD0B64062,"The Electoral College was a process created by the four fathers in the Constitution to established the election of the ""President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.""-
+
+Source 1: What Is the Electrol College,paragraph 1.
+
+The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. Majority electorcal votes for President is 270. ""Congressional delegtion: On for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators.""-
+
+Paragrah 2,What Is the Electoral College.
+
+Yes this involves in the 23rd Amendment of the Contitution that Washington D.C or District or Columbia is allocated 3 electors and is treated like a state in the Electoral College. The electors for a candidate running for President has a group of electors generally by his/her's political party. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e64266dd610e,828FD0B64062,Many believe there is something wrong with the Eledtoral College. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c452908d9c4b,828FD0B64062,"Even some like ""Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, And the AFL-CIO""-
+
+Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong.
+
+They all have in common is that they want to abolish the Electoral College. However the party will get to ""select a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee.""-
+
+Source 3 paragraph 2. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0fc2db8d818e,828FD0B64062,However rarely do you actually see it's possible for the winner to get eletoral vote but not popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a3f9a060f33,828FD0B64062,"in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes then Bush. But the agurement falls apart since it happens rarely. It was the frist time since 1888 that's about 112 years that this has happened. It's even highly unlikely it will end in a tie-as 538 is an even number it is divied to the states. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1a222d24766,828FD0B64062,"It was started by the founding fathers in order to have a informed government. It is rumored that they believed that the common person the person who votes for popularity is to uninformed to choose who will be President. So in the Constitution they put it as a ""pompromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress by popular vote of qulified citizens.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6f2483d854c1,82B3CF7114C7,"Most people who reach the age of 16 are elated to be able to learn how to drive. When they reach that point in their lives, they feel independent, responsible. They would not like to have that priviledge taken away from them. In fact, though most teens start to question authority more around the age of 16, they would do anything to stay out of trouble and would never risk the chance of having their driving priviledge revoked. Driverless cars would eliminate the entire experience of learning how to drive and all the pleasure one feels from it. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+edfdb56ca244,82B3CF7114C7,"Driverless cars are an brilliant idea and would reduce the number of casualties and deaths that are caused by car accidents every year.
+
+They would also, however, bring up new problems that would need to be solved. ",Position,Effective,,,
+da4576aef88b,82B3CF7114C7,"Not everyone would be able to afford a driverless car, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8934351a50b2,82B3CF7114C7,"they would no doubt be extremely expensive, therefor not everyone would have one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efc92541527f,82B3CF7114C7,"If there were to be a mix of car types on the road, there would be the issue of accidents caused by cars with drivers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ed359ca95ecc,82B3CF7114C7,Would the person with the driverless car be considered faultless everytime just because it is assumed that the driverless car has everything under control? Would the person driving their own car be to blame because they should be responsible enough to watch where they are going and navigate the roads safely? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f8794ca1eb7,82B3CF7114C7,Another issue that would arise would be NASCAR. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+67746694c60f,82B3CF7114C7,"If driverless cars became the norm, what would be the point of racecars? Many people would lose their jobs because they had only worked in one position for a long period of time. The men and women in the pit stops would lose their jobs, as well as the drivers themselves. Companies that are funded by NASCAR would be in trouble as well because who would they have to help them out? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d46d0b7a2e8a,82B3CF7114C7,"Driverless cars would eliminate some jobs, but also create some others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7004eee822c3,82B3CF7114C7,"Companies that make computer-driven cars would have a ton of business, therefor increasing the employment rates. That also increases the chance of theft by the companies' employees. With the new demand of different, more expensive parts, employees would more than likely be tempted to steal from one company to help another if it meant a larger paycheck. Which ever company was doing the best would have to be extremely careful and might even have to hirer extra security to protect themselves and their products. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee969e3caa2b,82B3CF7114C7,"Driverless cars would both solve and cause problems in the future, should they become the norm. If not everyone could afford the new, expensive cars, who would be blamed for the car accidents that are bound to happen? Sports that include car racing, such as NASCAR, would be eliminated and thousands of people would be left without jobs and, potentially, on the streets. Though the new cars would create new jobs as well, they would also cause new thefts by employees in companies to better the flow of there income. Driverless cars would cause more problems than they would be worth in the long run. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a488bc75fcca,82BBC3EC5C3A,You should require for all kids to help out on cleaning the school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+888bd073364f,82BBC3EC5C3A,Our school would be cleaner and then everyone would be proud that they had some part into making the school a better place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b8fd2c79388,82BBC3EC5C3A,Some Kid's might refuse to help out if so then there should be a consequence. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdb3a5b5b237,82BBC3EC5C3A,"And so we don't have conflicts with a group of kids doing more work than other's and would feel used because they did most of the work while other people did part. There Should be a limit on how many pieces of trash or how much space you should clean up, how much time you should help a teacher out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b8f4b3a55e99,82BBC3EC5C3A,"This should not be during school, it would waste your learning time ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+28212f0b847b,82BBC3EC5C3A,although after school would be good because you wont be disturbing anyone. If it's okay with the parents of the child then we should have community service for the school. Make this after school community service for us kids fun so we wont be bored and feel like if its not out responsibility to clean up and help out ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a7fcf86b3b9,82BBC3EC5C3A,"For Example You Should Help out to and the deans, give us free dress day's as our reward i guarantee it will make a difference. We Should also re-paint parts of the school that have been tagged up or written on so it can look clean and not as bad as it is. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fe88748b902,82BBC3EC5C3A,This Was My Perspective on what should you do with the community service for kids. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+dcde816cf1ad,82F7210163B5,"When learning at school with other students who cause distractions it is always hard to focus would you be able to focus? Even though going to school makes you socialize with friends and they feed you it sometimes is hard for a student to show up to school or even learn. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5a6fe3f87f8c,82F7210163B5,For me I would rather work on my assignments and others things my teacher would like me to do at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f7b84ab736a,82F7210163B5,reason why is that some students would not be able to focus especially when a student is causing lots of noise making it hard for you to focus on your assignment ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea085467780b,82F7210163B5,Another reason is that some students could live far from the school making it hard to get to school everyday ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+599776836762,82F7210163B5,Finally students could have more time to work and study making it easy for students to revise in a quite place at home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8169430119ea,82F7210163B5,one way is that they can put on headphones to relax and work hard and listen to some music. Some teachers hate when students have their phone out or when they are listening to music so begin at home may cause the student to focus more by listening to music because every student has a different way of studying and one student might be more focus if he or she loves listening to music when working or studying. This also makes the student more relived that he or she can listen to music. Students who are always trying to bust a joke or make a noise causes problems for a student who is trying to work to get her grade up this makes it very hard for a student to focus on what their are supposed to do. Students can benefit from listening to music because for me when I listen to music while I am working I feel great and energetic making it easy for me to knockout my work at a fast rate. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+cdad6d315831,82F7210163B5,Some students can't catch the bus because the bus is too far away from their house this makes going to school very difficult because without a reliable ride to school everyday you may be coming to school very late making it hard for you to study or work on assignments because you are worried about how you will get home because you do not have a reliable ride to school to home. This makes a student stress a lot thats why working at home you would not be worried about who would be taking to and back from school. It also makes the student more productive because they would not have to find a ride all the time they could study and get their work done faster than other people. Also coming to school late makes it very hard to understand what was taught in the classroom making a student very stressed over it because a student grade might go down because he or she failed the test cause they came late to school so that student might not have understood what was taught. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+c157d64ed777,82F7210163B5,Finally students could have more time to study and work on their assignments ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a7dfed25a91f,82F7210163B5,"sometimes teachers may go through the assignment very quickly making it hard for a student to understand the what he or she or supposed to do. Also teachers may not give as much time for students to finish assignment working at home makes it easier because you have as much time as needed for you to complete your assignment and also for a student to revise over their work before turning it in to the teacher students may not be able to turn in assignments on time depending on the assignment this makes a student very stressful because they do not want to turn in the assignment late and get a late grade for it. Sometimes students worry about things like this especially when a student grade is flunking and they need to get it up to graduate or move on to the next grade level. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b65170024788,82F7210163B5,Although going to school could very exciting for a student or very happy to see friends ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+25adde3ddff1,82F7210163B5,your happiest place is home ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a23d148af192,82F7210163B5,if you could a student could work from home that would change the way a student studies and complete assignment because they have time on their hands and also the are relaxed they would not have to sit in a class for over 55 minutes. Working at home could be very beneficial because It could be very difficult for another student to learn at school because they might be that one student who is making it hard for a student trying to focus or a student might be stressed because they might not have a ride to and back from school and worried that they might not enough time to finish their assignment and get it turned in on time. Working at home may not stress a student because they would have enough time to complete an assignment. This is why working on assignments at home would benefit a student.          ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7a8792cc06e9,82FD6318B4A5,The Electoral College has many flaws. One of the main ones is that it is unfair. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+dddc6c08d66f,82FD6318B4A5,They should get rid of it because of the unfairness and go to popular voting. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+84ec85a477d2,82FD6318B4A5,"The reason this is unfair is becasue of the ""winner-take-all system"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf8459d04253,82FD6318B4A5,and how people arent really voting for president but for the slate of electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+173d123a2950,82FD6318B4A5,"The first reason this is unfair is becasue of the ""winner-take-all system"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1397c06764c5,82FD6318B4A5,"The system is where the electors that chose the winning president gets rewarded when really it was from popular vote. Then it picks who your state's representing candidate will be based on the preident that won.(
+
+Source 1: What is the electoral college?)
+
+Wouldnt you think that the reason we vote for president is to get a reward and satisfaction of your candidate winning? But no thats not how it works instead it's the electoral collge that gets an award instead. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e11342abe5a,82FD6318B4A5,The second reason why it is unfair is beacause when we go every four years to vote for our new pesident we aren't really voting for them we are voting for the slate of electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ed7b5770887,82FD6318B4A5,"In
+
+Source two it mentions Bob Dole saying to abolish the electoral collge and most people will agree with that. It's unfair and not right to people that truly care. It also mentions how some states had most of their people voting for someone else that didnt win because the electoral college took over and voted the other way then popular vote."" It's the elctors who elect the president not the people."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f4f2f67b1a7,82FD6318B4A5,"To conclude this mess of being unfair these are the main reasons why people  would love to get rid of the electoral collge and go to poular vote because it is unfair dealing with the ""winner-take-all system"" and we aren't really voting for the president but instead the slate of electors.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea1c41e1d107,836389DC45F4,I think students shouldn't have cells phones at school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e7d633bcc0cc,836389DC45F4,its an distraction to all of the students ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0735bb012414,836389DC45F4,But it will be different if the students were just a little quiet with the cell phones ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+43d571185c56,836389DC45F4,instead they decide to bring DRAMA to the schools. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c07151fed5be,836389DC45F4,Cell phones are the number one reason why fights are getting started at schools around the country. If they didn't have cell phones the percentage of fighting and arguing will be decreased. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2fe2aa51271e,836389DC45F4,"Also ,there's another reason I think they should ban the cell phones because if we were to use our cell phones in class the only thing that would happen is that no one will learn anything but how to TALK on the cell phone, and how to TEXT on the cell phones and that's mainly the problem that we are still having to today. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0746ad029af1,836389DC45F4,"
+Next, is the drama it causes sometimes it can ruin an friend ship or even a marriage it can be that serious. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea5cdf7094fa,836389DC45F4,But to lose an husband or an wife a family mmbe an best friend over some stuff like that is really childish and it needs to STOP before it gets out of hand. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a0f1dd2a2f25,836389DC45F4,So that's it for WHY I THINK WE SHOULDN'T HAVE CELL PHONES AT SCHOOL ! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b8912e14d95e,836A3BBFA12D,I believe community service should not be mandatory. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+548ea5cf6b85,836A3BBFA12D,Many students do sports or are in clubs and if you made it mandatory students would not have time for these activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+135395eaed2c,836A3BBFA12D,Students would probably blow off the community service anyway and do whatever they want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+565630c34e4e,836A3BBFA12D,A third and final reason is that some community service takes long hours after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aab72f5dad3c,836A3BBFA12D,"Some clubs or sports have a positive influence on students, such as meting new people. I was on the cross country team for three years in a row. I met some good friends there. If community service was mandatory then this would not exist and students would miss very valuable opportunities. Another example is that sometimes, clubs help the school. At my school we have the helping hands club. You can tell by the name that this club helps the school. This club would have no time after school and our school would not be the place it is today. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d42b54259c62,836A3BBFA12D,"This would mainly be the ones who did not do community service in the first place. In this scenario, there would be no point in making community service mandatory at all. I can pretty much guarantee that the ones who didn't do community service in the first place would not do it anyway. Besides, some students already help the community without calling it ""community service"". Some students do nice things for people but don't consider that community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afd414064342,836A3BBFA12D,"When the average student gets home, all they usually think about is getting away from the stress at school. They don't want to get more work to worry about. Community service also might intrude on their sleep time too. If a student does community service right after school, they would then have to do their homework, sometimes students barely make it to bed with homework alone. If you threw in community service on top of that, image how little sleep students would get. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+073e12e22372,836A3BBFA12D,"Community service should be a choice, not mandatory. Sometimes students serve the community with the little things they do every day, like RELATIVE_NAME's challenge says. Clubs and organisations are important to a student too and with community service around there would be no time. Some students might not even do the service at all. And it takes too long which may result in sleep loss. I hope you take my views into consideration. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5174f9bc2012,8387BDBA7F9B,"Yes, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home by online source or video conferencing ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a15018a8f150,8387BDBA7F9B,"because it will help them to be responsible by a way that they don't want to loose a day of class, thinking about a person if helping them and it can help them, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2eabf13dac13,8387BDBA7F9B,"when they have to take care of their childs, family or even work. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54d567e42f9c,8387BDBA7F9B,"One reason, if they have appointments or need to work for economic reasons like: help your family, pay rent or pay your car. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eeb3982a5c24,8387BDBA7F9B,"It will help a student to have time to prepare himself and to work hard to gain his benefits from being someone in life. Also, they are going to be more likely to find new job opportunities, depending on your school level or what dregree do yo get in college. This online classes will help student to have more time to enjoy family time, to have a good source way of life and to make his strength more capable of hisself. It can also help the student believe that he can do it and he is good in everything he want to do with his education, if he wants to keep going straight without going back. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2449dcd31493,8387BDBA7F9B,"Second reason, is that every student can make an effort to keep going to school at home. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+817d30e6ad55,8387BDBA7F9B,"They also can be positive in the things they do and they never should give up. Even if someone try to foolish them with lies, they don't have to listen and they will be successful in life. Many things will come in the future and they should keep following their dreams. They should keep their dreams intact from others and knowing that there are many bad persons who will try to sabotage your dreams without caring you. They have to be good enough to demonstrate other that you can do it and not to feel bad about someone else stuffs. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe0ffb49324c,8387BDBA7F9B,"
+Many people thinks that nowdays we don't care about school, we don't even know what school is for but we can show them that not everyone is like that. If someone is not going to school is because for economic problems and also discrimination. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+232dbe789342,8387BDBA7F9B,"On this times people are been racist with people who are poor and having a different color skin, but if they get to know everyone, they are going to take a good example of life from the others , that try go get from all the problems they have and making them thinks that they keep following their dreams without taking care of those problems. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+451b76cc4b59,8387BDBA7F9B,"After all, many students will greduate and keep going with their life without having any problem about jobs and they will be good economically. They also will give their childs a reason why they should go to school and follow their dreams without letting people to punish their dreams. It also will help their family to support them without caring about what other people says, but everyone should conserve good things about everything. Also this students will have an illustrate part of his life, where they are going from success to success keeping everything on the side but his dreams on the front.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6a8a02938ce6,83C1CC6938F4,I am writing this letter to you today to let you know I stroungly believe that we should demolish the process of electoral college. Why you may ask? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e33544d5880,83C1CC6938F4,"First, it is unfair, we are the votes they not. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd82eff2d0c3,83C1CC6938F4,"Second, it is outdated (
+
+""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f65ee604dbd,83C1CC6938F4,"First, it is not fair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34fc2dd56493,83C1CC6938F4,"We the people are surposed to chose the president not some privite party that we never meet. According to ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer ;according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- wor the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to kind we have now."" So we vote yes but he doesn't become president; do we even matter? It doesn't seem like it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+348b0adfdcd8,83C1CC6938F4,"Second of all, it is very outdated. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4c360ae1e61,83C1CC6938F4,"According to ""What Is the Electoral College?"" by The Office of the Federal Register this process was founded in the days of the four founding fathers. That's old! Now in days we have found better and fair ways to do pretty much every thing. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f53d8c7b89e5,83C1CC6938F4,I hope this letter helps you decide on weather or not we should keep the process of electoral college. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a571f26bd3a7,845DB3AC386E,"Electoral College is a process that help the United States over many many years. So my question now is, why are you trying to get rid of it? They made so it a vote from Congress would go towards the President and a popular vote from cictizens. Without the Electroal College barely anyone's vote would be heard and Congess would be making our choice for us ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c63fa0c5d2ba,845DB3AC386E,"I believe that we should keep the Electroal, because it makes citizens feel that they are in the system and without it people aren't really voting for who they want ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f19f1eb50034,845DB3AC386E,"To begin, keeping the Electoral College makes citizens feel that they are in the system. Even though they may not feel like they are in the system, this will let people's voices be heard and give them their rights to vote for who they want as President ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a69f5a88a1dd,845DB3AC386E,"You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you wre actually voting for your candidate's electors."" This quote from source 1 states that baicsally people are voting for their candidate's electors who vote for the President. Therefore, keeping the Electoral College makes people feel that their vote counts ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f1ea94e355a,845DB3AC386E,"Also, without the Electoral College citizens aren't really voting for who they want. Even though other people are voting for you, at least they r voting for what u want and what you think ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ca504a30c45,845DB3AC386E,"The residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised- to feel that votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president.""this quote from source 3 explains that without the Electoral College their vote won't count and that the new president won't have any of their interests. To end this, if we didn't have the Electoral College no one's vote would count ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+909df30e1eb9,845DB3AC386E,"To sum this up, the Electroal College would give citizens the right to choose who the want and feel like they are apart of the system. This would give everyone a chance to let their voice heard. So why would they try to get rid of it, if it helps lots of people? Therefore I believe that we should keep it ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9a12597fe741,84AD2A5BF53E,"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral college process consits of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes byCongress. The Electoral College consits of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President.
+
+Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for thePresident, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the President. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows much worse. Considering thst the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, end that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy wouldn't have actually gone to Kennedy.)
+
+At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. It's offical: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the argument against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: ""Abolish the electoral college!"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c9ddff46d88,84AD2A5BF53E,Abolishing the Electoral college should be the right thing to do.  ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a9ec8a563cf2,84D821F541E7,Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online video conferencing. It could be better for kids who have problems learning and sitting still. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+87f61c17b6c4,84D821F541E7,Some school should offer that because it could help people with anixty. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6391c351a7b0,84D821F541E7,People who have anixty cant deal with alot of people. They so freak out about small places and freak out of the littles things. People with depression struggle with there self they aren't confroble with body. They also stop eating or stop caring about thingd. People with depression cut there self to help with the pain. They do realize that people care about them. It could help with people sleeping. Some people dont sleep at night. They would rather sleep doing the day. It could help with people getting sick all the time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01f5190b4a1c,84D821F541E7,School shouldnt offer this because people wont make any friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30a2b0bbf2b8,84D821F541E7,"Kids can play sports in school. They can play soccer,baseball,softball,football bakestball,cheer,golf and wrestle. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0463311ac55,84D821F541E7,Some familys cant afford to buy food for there famliy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da5c5d13cb1d,84D821F541E7,Some kids only get one meal a day. My school gets bags every friday and sends it home with kids so they can eat. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afb9997f83fb,84D821F541E7,Kids who play sports are working out and always on the go. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+493cc7b30735,84D821F541E7,They loose weight when they are working out. Its really good for your body. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b322a4b7bed9,84D821F541E7,Kids wont do their homework if they arent here. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17b343ad3f95,84D821F541E7,Some kids learn better one on one but others dont. Some kids are hands on and others are verbial learns. When kids get kick out they do work online. Some kids do collage classes. some kids get to leave school early for work but they are taking that a way. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+33b50e2d26d5,84D821F541E7,Some school offer distance learing as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+479137a2609a,84D821F541E7,I dont think it is a good idea at all. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a733b5f45f11,850401568E9C,I have an opinion that I know others will agree with extremely. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7e250e67cba9,850401568E9C,"By popular vote, we should change the election process to The People voting directly. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d43645736499,850401568E9C,"According to my knowledge, the Electoral College isn't fair to voters. I know that many people such as, Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFC-CIO agree with me on this. For instance, in the second passage on the first paragraph, it says that and much more. ""They're not alone [Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter...]; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore - thanks to the quirks of the Electoral College - won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" Suggesting by what this satement says, a lot of people disagree with our system of election ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bde3a24a940f,850401568E9C,"We should be able to vote directly ourselves and not have electors do it for us. How do we know we can trust them? Yes, they're a part of our government, but that doesn't mean a thing. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d8472490bd63,850401568E9C,"The Electoral College was originally founded to be exactly what it is today; a vote that is held in Congress that is made by popular vote by citizens. But it has changed more than you think.  In article one in the 6th paragraph, it tells exactly how the Electoral College is run. ""The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in Novemeber. You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors."" This paragraph is saying that the person you vote for is basically supposed to be voted for by his electors. In the second  article, what the author is saying is that even though this certain person will get popular vote, they won't agree with it and they'll go against the votors decisions. This isn't the right thing, obviously. I'm sure that no one knows for a fact that's true though. Even though, this is still a messed up way to vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a881c4ec4785,850401568E9C,"This country is about freedom and the right to do what we'd like, as long as it's rational. This is not rational. We need to be able to vote independentley. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+de68b9daf1bd,850401568E9C,"There are many things wrong with this aspect of our government. Even though people don't think much of it, we're being treated unfairly. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1c70778703ab,850401568E9C,"In the second article, in paragraph 2, Plumer (the author) makes a very good point. ""Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes."" This makes us realize that we don't know who, for a fact, the electors are. It also shows that we don't know who the electors will vote for. Usually, they would probably vote for the person that were made to vote for. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2c6e8c549cf4,850401568E9C,None of us know what goes on in the Electoral College. We don't know if they vote for who we tell them to vote for. We don't know if they practically cheat us from getting the president we want. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1a6911f1ca1f,850401568E9C,"In article one, paragraph 8, there is something that the governor does that maybe is supposed to reassure us. ""After the presidential election, your governor prepares a ""Cerificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors.""  This is just them saying who was all voted for and who all ran. It also says who the electors were. They give us this probably just to notify us but maybe it's also an idea to make us think that Electoral College is proud to help us get who we want. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1f8d7a98cc73,850401568E9C,"As I have said through this whole letter, we deserve to directly vote for our President. This isn't fair to us or the person we want elected.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a0d2bc30e100,8521B650F8A9,I think that you should require students to perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e6163c6556a7,8521B650F8A9,It will help all elementary school students to do better on their school work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd5894c2bb85,8521B650F8A9,you can let students that are interested in this program to participate in it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+99f2f22c2604,8521B650F8A9,"Students that do not want to participate, must let them do what they want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf7cdefcf531,8521B650F8A9,Principal I will be part of this program and i will help those elementary school students. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+17465fcc9e98,8521B650F8A9,"you still have to ask the students that are interested if this program will affect their grades in school.
+
+I will help you organize this program.
+
+I will also bring as many tutors as possible.
+
+I will try to make this program successful.
+
+Many other students and parents are going to help us organize this program.
+
+This program is going to help educate many elementary school students and make a good future for them.
+
+I will do my best to make those students successful. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+032a6b69290b,8521B650F8A9,You should announce this program to the whole school so many people can participate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f30ee1fdea4c,8521B650F8A9,"We need as much students as possible.
+
+Helping people is one of my hobbies.
+
+We can also provide different interesting stuff that students can do during tutoring time.
+
+We can provide sports and other things that they want.
+
+We can make it as an after school program.
+
+We should also provide buses to people that are going to stay. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+556e50810c68,85417E9C78E7,i'm writing you today to ask for changing electoral college votes to popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5c72643b9a67,85417E9C78E7,elcltoral votes we not really voting for the person we want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce8bb6a92fc2,85417E9C78E7,"winner-take-all system doesn't work. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+02b9428c00ac,85417E9C78E7,"on electon day  you may not be voting for the candidate you think your voting for. I think thats not right, not knowing who we are really voting for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db57421668b2,85417E9C78E7,"Like it says in the article Does the elctoral college work?, states that ""when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for candidates electors"". like seriously who are these ""
+
+electors ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+672dd437d4ae,85417E9C78E7,"we should get a staraightforward vote to the president only, we dont need someone chooseing for us. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c63cadc6c46,85417E9C78E7,"also there's always others saying its eaiser, it'll be better i understand and see where they coming from ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+25c343983f1a,85417E9C78E7,but the american people the real voters want a voice. also the winner-take-all system is just like not fair. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a6d213c04670,85417E9C78E7,"like it says in the article, ""During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including rhode island and south carolina and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad"". how are voters supposed to vote an cant even see who or why to vote for the candidate. also a situation could arise the state could almost be half an half and a candidate has slighty more votes than the other the whole electoral votes goes to him/she, the others who voted are left dumbfounded like where did my votes go, thats not fair to the american people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+49d8b08927f7,85417E9C78E7,Mr. senator im asking you today just to please put this in considerationg cause electoral votes are not letting us vote for the candidate we want and the winner-take-all system doesn't work ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7a39b4acbebd,8563982CE8C7,I believe that cell phones are something that people need to have sometimes ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+872f10c0b3f5,8563982CE8C7,for example say one student missed the bus and needs to get a ride home but all of his friends are gone and the school is locked. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+59a915f3b30c,8563982CE8C7,He has no option but to call home and have his parents come get him. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e77d73841fd,8563982CE8C7,I think that policy 1 is a good idea and that they need to have them but they need to be off or in a locker protected from other students but not a problem to the teacher and the student. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e3789e2bd1d2,8563982CE8C7,Phones can interrupt many thing like dinner with family or study time for a big test that is coming up. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cdd737127587,8563982CE8C7,People sometimes use cell phones to often ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+34c6cdf0170a,8563982CE8C7,for example some kid is trying to do a book report but his friend is in the library fake reading a book and texting him. Neither one of them can concentrate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb89e0e60282,8563982CE8C7,Texting in class is a problem and it need to stopped. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fb037c9a4020,8563982CE8C7,It has caused many grades to drop and many kids to get into trouble. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d98f16f7b78a,8563982CE8C7,Calling is sometimes necessary to the kid that has to find a way to get hame or to contact a parent to let them know where they are and what they are doing and to inform them so they don't get worried. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bc46427b3b4,8563982CE8C7,That is why i go for school policy 1 because sometimes the phones are needed. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+927400c58808,8586AF2475F3,"I have been told that you wanted to change the policy on the grade students should have to play in sports (if you have a grade C average than you wouldn't be able to play) , and that you also wanted the students views on that. Well I am a student here at SCHOOL_NAME and I know for the majority ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+186d23cbdc2d,8586AF2475F3,most kids wouldn't think it fair if you went into action with this policy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+650b3653cfee,8586AF2475F3,"One reason why you should put this policy into action is because if the majority of the students have a grade C average at your school, then SCHOOL_NAME would lose many team members ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+86184b6d6009,8586AF2475F3,"this policy might make you think it would encourage kids to have better grades, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4b17a1d1e5bc,8586AF2475F3,"but it might affect the team for those who want to slack off, not even necessarily slack off because a grade C average isn't even failing ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6a0a20dc685e,8586AF2475F3,"Unless you want the school's reputation to go down by losing many games because they have little members, than you could follow through with this policy. But I wouldn't encourage it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df322cce98e7,8586AF2475F3,"Another reason why I wouldn't encourage putting this policy into action is because a grade C average isn't considered failing, and in most schools for activities they won't let you participate if you are failing, but it would be fine with them if you had a grade C average. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+863807b64f31,8586AF2475F3,"Not that we are in competition or anything but I am sure SCHOOL_NAME wants to be represented as a good, cool, and fair school. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1edc5d66a11f,8586AF2475F3,"Also another reason could be because maybe a student has a grade average C in one of their elective classes, now that definitely wouldn't be fair if someone didn't get to do sports because they had a grade average C in an elective class. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff9004394cea,8586AF2475F3,"Electives are supposed to be a privilege, not something you should base whether they play sports or not. And the fact that they had a grade average C in that class and saying that they couldn't play sports wouldn't be fair because if they aren't even failing the class then they should have the right to play. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f561403b1206,8586AF2475F3,These are a few reasons why you shouldn't tell kids they can't play sports if they a grade C average. Think these reasons over and thank you for the time being that you read this letter. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c1b19f0af9b4,85B74EF4E441,"I do not like the idea of driverless cars, becuase i have a lack of trust of computers ",Position,Adequate,,,
+74c03e0f439a,85B74EF4E441,. I'm old fashioned and prefur to have a human being control a machine. If i have to put my child's life into someone elses hands it would not be a computer. Now I am not saying the machine can not do it's job. I am siply saying in my opinion there are to many things that could go wrong. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+07a2de42e0c9,85B74EF4E441,Someone could hack it for instence ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5a518cc5482,85B74EF4E441,"They could run the vehicle of the road, or ey sencers could nowfunction. Say you are going down the road and a little kid runs out infront of you. In a regular car in i can brerak every time, but in a driverless car if the fuse is bad or a wire is loose it may not tivate the breaking system, becuase the sencer was not working. Now imagion for me if you will that kid that ran out in the road was your own child. Young and inocennt with so much life before him/her. Would you really want a driverless car to be the one it ran out infront of? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a2b7a21318e,85B74EF4E441,"Now I know people do not always drive safe or pay attention eather, if we inforced the laws we already have in place to protect or children and others. We could make the streets and eventually our beautiful nation safe once more, becuase today our nation is in to big of a hurry, and we forget what it means to take it slow and enjoy life. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56c064a818a5,85B74EF4E441,So i say no. We do not need driverless cars becuase it would only end badly. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0ee58c96d464,85F71FCFED32,"Even though there are many perks attributed to them, driverless cars will more than likely cause many more problems than they will solve. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f491dd01f277,85F71FCFED32,"They are incapable of responding to accidents that happen to other vehicles, let alone reacting to an accident or a possible accident to themselves. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a9d3df634c23,85F71FCFED32,"They can have navigation errors or may react to what could be seen as an oncoming car, but it might just be some animal or a harmless object. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+acae1b865ac3,85F71FCFED32,"Even in movies, the driverless cars end up having problems or malfunctioning quite a bit. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+87ee62ccdf53,85F71FCFED32,"even with all the technology put into them, the cars still are not actually driverless. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+fbdd2441e041,85F71FCFED32,"A human would swerve out of the way, speed up, or slow down. When something happens, the driverless cars ""alert the driver,"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming) so that he or she may take control. In the short amount of time that it would take for the vehicle to alert the driver and for the driver to take control, disaster could be avoided, but due to this lack of reaction time, accidents could be unavoidable. Drivers must be alerted to any accidents that don't even include the car, forcing the driver to take control and navigate his or her self. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af884aefac01,85F71FCFED32,"Drivers must take control of their vehicles when ""pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents,"" (Driveless Cars Are Coming). Some driverless cars are not even able to drive themselves unless under very specific conditions, such as specially made roads that are designed specifically so that the car may navigate itself. Although the driverless cars are supposed to ""mimic the skill of a human at the wheel,"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming), there are many situations, some already listed, that they are unable to do what humans do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ecbab056840f,85F71FCFED32,"Even if driverless cars are mass-produced, they will still have to move alongside many people with normal cars. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2760a4342335,85F71FCFED32,"This could cause a variety of problems and setbacks, as human drivers may not provide the regular pattern that the driverless cars and the roads create. Human spontaneousness may interfere with the driverless cars and their sensors designed to alert the occupant of danger. This may cause a driverless car to swerve or react to some small movement of a car driven by a human, while if a human were driving, they would not have reacted, seeing as well as doing this regularly, they understand that there is no risk or danger to them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ac4de12c520b,85F71FCFED32,"Driverless cars will be of little entertainment interest to people. Drivers would ""get bored waiting for their turn to drive,"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming). ",Claim,Effective,,,
+456546dec6b5,85F71FCFED32,"If the occupant of the car got bored, he or she might doze off or get distracted. With this distraction, they will take longer to react to the need to take control of the car, if they react at all. Drivers will get bored of driverless cars, quickly reverting back to regular cars, thus causing many companies to lose money due to how much they invested in all the technology required to create the driverless cars. Some people would even buy the vehicles in the first place due to lack of interest. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+433c216f78c3,85F71FCFED32,"Due to all the money put into the driverless cars, they are going to be very expensive and out of the ordinary worker's price range. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b266e557c25e,85F71FCFED32,"With all the technology put into the discovery and creation of driverless cars, there is a going to be an extremely high cost. Sometimes the technologies required to make these vehicles are ""simply too expensive to be practical,"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming). Very few people would be able to afford these cars, so there would be little buyers for the companies. They are using devices that at one point in time ""cost two hundred million dollars,"" (Driverless Cars Are Coming). Companies would end up losing more money than they would gain if they invested in driverless cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf85bac5d0ba,85F71FCFED32,"Although many arguments cannot be proven until they are out and on the road in regularity, driverless cars should not be created for normal use. They can cause many problems on the road. They are unsafe and unentertaining to the occupants. They may have navigation issues when faced with and accident or a work zone or some form of traffic diversion. If driverless cars are produced, they may not stay popular for any long period of time. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0ee690c3b180,86052928ECB9,I believe all students must do tasks to assist the community. Students should participate in helping the community ,Position,Effective,,,
+a4243aeeb98d,86052928ECB9,it helps our community and city possibly even our state look good ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2f514a6fb087,86052928ECB9,it will make the children performing the tasks more responsible. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95c57f7abcae,86052928ECB9,Most kids helping with the community will feel good about themselves ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7bd435a4fda7,86052928ECB9,they will think to themselves wow i really did help make a difference in my community. They will often take pride in their work. We should help our communities. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a413e94500f5,86052928ECB9,"The children of OTHER_NAME should help clean our streets, help the needy, raise money for the city parks or even tutor the children in OTHER_NAME elementary schools. By doing this, the tourists will begin to say good things about the city of OTHER_NAME and the city of OTHER_NAME. We will receive more tourists and people interested in moving to OTHER_NAME or OTHER_NAME. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+86e5df123441,86052928ECB9,"We could even assist the needy, if we assist the needy we will look like a community that cares about our residents. When we help the younger we are helping our future lawyers and doctors even our future engineers with their education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4776798dc04e,86052928ECB9,we will feel depended on and we will most likely feel thankful. We will feel good about ourselves and we will want to participate in more activities to help our community. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+63ffc29551e1,86052928ECB9,"i hope you have come to an conclusion that you should encourage students to participate in community service, not only for the good of the people but for the good of the hearts of the children. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2e340fb9ae2b,86A511A55117,"I think students can benefit if they are able to attend classes from home, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dc9c9b1be802,86A511A55117,learning as a option for students who wants to finish a carear or have a good job. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+acf2e5ef2b00,86A511A55117,Take those classes online or videos conferencing is not the same thing like to be able to go to classes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a918278aebe5,86A511A55117,"In class students can ask about any question they have or get the information they are looking for, and the schools teacher can see how they are learnig but, online they don't have much oction like read a book or be able to ask any question they have to anybody. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68574425b2f2,86A511A55117,Attend to classse is great is a oction from student to choose but is the smart oction for for student who know what they want to do in they future. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a290d362725,86A511A55117,Schools is a place where students have the desition by you're own. There is where students can start makeing options and try finish what they really dream. Be able to atted classes from home is hard thing to discuss but when students are able to go there is great bacause is where they have to be and never give up during that time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c11a9af76369,86A511A55117,"School is not a principle to starts getting information about how thing are working, or what options we can choose for be a porofessional after schools. Prevent oction in schools is preposterous because that is not ducing, good octions during school.
+
+Students who rually have the decition to go to schools even know the distace but they are benefit. that is a oction, but when they get there is alot of information and option they can lissend from teachers and other students. When they go to schools they are giving a step more every day, to them life and they are benefit in school for the alot of option they can have in schools. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e5e0fe1b60d,86A511A55117,"Schools is a benifif for all yung people to learnd how start life, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4488932abd30,86A511A55117,"when you get out from schools and have a good job. for have the opportunite, students need finish school firts. Not matter the distance or the skills they have during that period time. after that they will see how everything is change to be better in they way.
+
+For somo students is hard to make that decition.
+
+But when they have the oction and they can do it is a good thing because they can learning more about and have more opportunities when they graduate from schools thay have good jobs and more oction to choose. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45df7e7eb7fd,86A511A55117,"Some students think is preposterous to to make decition in schools, bacause is alot of oction they can choose, and alot thing they want to be but they only have somo octions ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d23df4374eb3,86A511A55117,For somo of then is hinder to go and pick that oportunities ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fc66bf2c68e,86A511A55117,"Instance when students live far fom schools is hard to get there they need like a car to get there, but parents are allways insist to students to go to schools not matter how hard is all they wants is a good future for they childrens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7f482ca2ba0,86A511A55117,"School is a personality decition in life, butsmart decition for people who is looking for good oction in life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73ea60b9d29c,86A511A55117,"Ertheless who finish school have more oction the people who don't finish. During school students need have to be inmate because schools is a hard time.
+
+For students in schools is like stairway, because they walk aroung getting information, that is a good oction for teachers, to stall information and try to preparate students to then life. One way to be a perfectionist is graduste from schools. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18c0d86b79c7,86A511A55117,"Fanally when students finish schools they did a good job and they have more option to choose. More of they have good jods or go to college and finish a carear, and they know how follow the the dreams, because when they was in chools there was alot of skills and the crusts those over and over that was like the firts hard thing they start with, that was alot of bad action they can choose but they don't choose any of those. Finally finish with right thing, Now is fancy work and alot oction to choose in life. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+996adf572746,86FB71F29A12,i think we should help the community ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+c1a6c22e253e,86FB71F29A12,"by cleaning not by tutoring because that just helps the students. not other people of the community. we need to help everyone.
+
+not just students. maybe we could do both that way it would help students and the community. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+59e32a2669ce,86FB71F29A12,i hope you agree with me. i would help with both. so that i could do my part. if you don't agree with me. you could tell me and i will think of something else. or we could talk it through. and find a suggestion that we both agree with. i just want to help everyone in the community. so that everyone will be happy and clean up and tutor. and when someone is not doing one thing they could do the other. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+594650786cad,86FB71F29A12,maybe it would help other people as well. i mean we want everyone happy don't we. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+16f8a6fcedf3,86FB71F29A12,because we all care for the people of the community. to me the community is important to everyone. because if we don't have everyone happy we can't help the people of the school. i know this is not to your control. but i was hoping that everyone could be happy. but both does sound alot. if we can't do both we can at least do one that will benefit everyone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+324d01d286ed,86FB71F29A12,i know i am just a student but we can make a big difference in the community. we could probably make it better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ddf002b2de96,870D9B35F20A,I'm wanting to keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be72bc5adcce,870D9B35F20A,because it comes in handy in our system for voting. They can help us break a tie between two competing candidates that want to become presidents of the United States. You may not think its a big deal but it is. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00e213bd2c2e,870D9B35F20A,"I don't like the ""winner-take-all"" system, I find it unfair that the president can automatically win a vote from one state. They need to get use to the voting system instead of winning one automatically. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1fc38a2ecfde,870D9B35F20A,"The one thing I like about the voting system is that people can pick who would be the best candidate for our nation. For example, I find it a terrible mistake that people picked Obama and all the stuff he had promised in the pass and still haven't kept his words. In my opinion, I think Obama daughter can build a better system than him. It whatever though, it the people choice that they want Obama to be president of the United States. I just think he just a liar to our nation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42c586f45879,870D9B35F20A,the Electoral College can be important to the system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b410b4624627,870D9B35F20A,"The bad side of the Electoral college is that under its system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who turn elect for the president. The singel best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. Us Americans should consider ourselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. Consider that the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3ca796c830cd,870D9B35F20A,"If you don't like my opinion, then make a new system that is close enough to be a consensus. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fd09d7acb7b0,87186C957B20,"Well i would choose , allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times , as long as the phones are turned off during class time 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+d390942b4845,87186C957B20,"A reason why is because for just in case of an emergency , you just call your parents ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+61d013f20b24,87186C957B20,"ask them to help you with the situation your in . 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a54d74dcf3e7,87186C957B20,A second reason is because you might feel sick ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31897033d4d4,87186C957B20,would want to call your parents to go home . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3dd06f990770,87186C957B20,"Then my third reason would be , for when your in lunch ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+31c30af0fdf7,87186C957B20,you just want to chat with your friend and tell them how was school and what their going to do after school . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b5f66fa4eb9,87186C957B20,you might want to turn off your phone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a106aeddd74f,87186C957B20,might not want to be in class and your friend or parents call you and interrupts your teacher or learning ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d474cd611183,87186C957B20,"So this is why i pick
+
+Policy 1 . ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+77b2247fee16,87258EA0A73C,"I thank we all should have B or
+
+C average cuz we all should ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3b43460ae41e,87258EA0A73C,the other students should do and we try harder maybe we can get to that way ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+695dc1b7d051,87258EA0A73C,we gotta stop leting people tell us that we can't do nothing. And we or susesful and we can do it if really try hard this his school and we or tha best like you said we would not let any other middle school beat us and it's that we or making a chance. like it's all ways good for other student they can do it and i can to but i just need to try harde ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa9b9a1f09b5,87258EA0A73C,im not sayin u a bad princical and u or considering to make a chang that's good all the studets should that fun activits and stuff like that because they come to school and that we try to make a chang and that we truy to good on the test i try to do my best. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f27a585e7c95,8727FFFF8441,Community service is a way to distinguish selfish people from selfless people. Some people do large amounts of community service such as working at a soup kitchen and donating food to a food bank. Some even take it to the next level by going and helping out in places like Africa. Unfortunately not all people are open to helping people. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+a742dc7fe6f0,8727FFFF8441,At our school we should enforce that kids have to participate in community service at least twice a year. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8f0f47a6c753,8727FFFF8441,Community service makes people feel better. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e2bc061f1b2b,8727FFFF8441,It is a very moving experience when you give food to someone who is hungry. It teaches you to be appreciative of what you have after you see someone who has nothing. It also makes you feel good inside. Having community service might change the attitude of some kids at your school. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+8f458a948513,8727FFFF8441,Some people think that community service is useless or a waste of time. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9bcda2e12a8e,8727FFFF8441,But in reality it only takes up a few days a year of an average persons life. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e1ee90e79cb9,8727FFFF8441,"To only make the kids do two days of community service is no high price for anyone. It even doesn't take up the entire day, only a couple of hours. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0849163c9fd3,8727FFFF8441,"Community service helps people, makes you feel better, and is not a humongous time consumer. Anyone who has some extra time should defiantly chose to do some. No one has a busy enough schedule do not be able to participate. As the principal of the school please require students to do community service. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e5566899c02,8732FA1BF586,How do you feel about the Electoral College? Do you think that we should still keep the Electoral College or should it be changed by election of popular vote for the president of the United States? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+35ed4cadff90,8732FA1BF586,From my side I think that we should keep the Electoral College. There are my reasons that conviced me to say this because we have use it for many years now. How is it that you can vote without the Electoral College? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d6cae69c83d2,8732FA1BF586,"The first reason why I think we should keep the Electoral College is be cause it is not a place, it is a process. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ecab3607e1bd,8732FA1BF586,So how can this hurt other people to not want this if you can't find it? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+98a889818d57,8732FA1BF586,This process is a very smart thing that the founding fathers established because it is fare to everyone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+607a677a7826,8732FA1BF586,"It is fare because it is a voting decision that the electors elected as President and Vice President. To me making an election is the best way to make a decision so that everyone wont be angry at each other.
+
+The Electoral College is a voting system. Voting is the one of the best ways to pick out things that everyone has a different opinion. For example, evey four years there is an elective going on for who can become president of The United States Of America. This system will allow everyone in the United States to vote who should be the next president. The same thing goes for the governments of each state and county. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3980dc61304c,8732FA1BF586,When we use the Electoral College it helps us figure out the differents of each election. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4edbec68ce93,8732FA1BF586,"For example, when a president or government is being elected we can figure out who is grtting more electives. We can see how many people are voting and how many electives did each person received. With that being said we can easily tell which person won the elective and who didn't. We can also see the percentage of votes and how many states voted for each person. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+be917c71e838,8732FA1BF586,"These are my reasons why I said that the Electoral College should stay with us. It is a good way to vote, it helps us see how many people voted, and it is vary fare with everyone in The United States. Its has helped us vote for governments and presidents for many years and hopfuly it will still keep on running. This is why voting is the best way to make things equal with everyone because it is done by electing. Why would we want to take something away like the Electoral College when it was established by our own Founding Fathers? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8310061fd581,8745FC479838,"I think policy 1 should be the best option for letting students have cell phones, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+aec56b3e0026,8745FC479838,the reason being is because what happens if we are in an emergency and the teacher's phones don't work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+450e7b206f50,8745FC479838,we will need phones wich reach a good signal. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0781f13fde7d,8745FC479838,"what would happen without phones in the world, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b72acc478af2,8745FC479838,we need to appreciate what the humankind has given us and use it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+df643424001b,8745FC479838,"True teenagers at times are irresponsible and they don't care about they're body and true they are lazy and don't right correct spelling and not only that but get distracted with they're phones and focus less on they're studies , ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2615371735d9,8745FC479838,but us as a nation we can do something about it or even change the education. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1b6d233e5a44,8745FC479838,"what i am trying to say is that we need to appreciate technology and true at times people are bad educated but we as a nation can collaborate together so that we could end this, please make the right decision by choosing policy 1. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e28789baed0d,876A650B692E,"Many students in the world are placed with the issue of whether or not it would be beneficial to actually attend school in a brick and mortar setting. Some find it beneficial, allowing the students to have a taste of freedom an independence in their work environment, while others think of it as an excuse to stay home and slack off. Pushing that agenda forward, many schools offer students the opportunity to take some of their classes off campus at a different location such as a community college campus or even in the comforts of their own homes. With that being said, more students are choosing to take their classes at different locations instead of the traditional setting. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+cc479cbb21cb,876A650B692E,Students can benefit from taking classes away from the traditional settings of a school ,Position,Effective,,,
+72a0ac5c212b,876A650B692E,by letting them get a taste of their own educational freedo ,Claim,Effective,,,
+af3f1905d1db,876A650B692E,by lowering their stress levels while letting them become more comfortable in their own work environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1a703ca788dd,876A650B692E,Students can benefit from taking classes away from the traditional setting by giving them a taste of what their own educational freedom is like ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c269ec676ca3,876A650B692E,"Many college students around the world use online schooling in comparison to physical schooling on a campus. In the United States alone, many college students choose to use online schooling for a number of reasons. Online schooling may be used by them to help balance their lives, choosing to be able to do their work at their own time, compared to being in a building or university, where the deadlines are strict and there is possibly a hard time balancing their lives and school if they have a family. Having that type of educational freedom is very important in that sense, as to help students, no matter how old they are, achieve their educational goals in less of a strict environment. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+26851d4115e0,876A650B692E,Students can benefit from taking classes away from the traditional setting by helping lower their stress levels and being more comfortable in their own work environment.  ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2f28b80d0864,876A650B692E,"Many students face the intense pressures of being in a brick and mortar school environment and often can't handle it, becoming very uncomfortable where they are and losing sight of themselves in the stress. By pulling those students out of the environment that hinders their ability to learn and retain information properly due to their stress and lack of comfort, and placing them into an environment where they can prosper, retain and possibly learn faster can truly help students become better and more confident in themselves and the work they put out to the world. When students are constantly stressed out in their school setting, it makes it harder for them to excel in their studies, even when it isn't a subject that is particularly hard for them, so allowing them the extra educational freedom of choosing how they want to take their classes, whether it be completely at home on the computer, completely physical in a brick and mortar buliding, or some mixture of the two, students can combat their educational stress. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+65e175d77c66,876A650B692E,"Not all students face the problem of being stressed in the school setting, some quite like how the curriculum can be set and like the challenges of strict due dates and lectures. More often than not, though, students do find it hard to juggle their schoolwork and their lives. Giving them the option to be able to replace the way they learn and their schooling in general can pave the way for them to become comfortable in their work setting, more dedicated to their work, and overall much happier students than they were before. By grabbing their attention with the benefits of schooling in ways that are seen as less stressful and easier, they can put more effort into their studies and get higher grades, all while getting a taste of all the different ways of schooling in college are like in the world.                                                                                                                                                                  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+caf34874e210,877D0253BD80,Have you ever voted? do you thing you need to vote to be a good american citizen? if yes why do you think that? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6ea34f63ae41,877D0253BD80,In my opinion i think there is a very good reason we should have an Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+293aa6924eec,877D0253BD80,"My reason for that is that the Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. This is why i believe the Electoral College should continue just this little piece of information is all about organization, and organization alows us to get things done faster. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd6a6393e602,877D0253BD80,"In paragraph 10 in the article ""Does the Electoral College Work?"" the author says ""IF you lived in texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pleged to Kerry."" ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+75a9c48b90be,877D0253BD80,The author absolutely makes no point because you still are basicly puting in a vote for the president but just not directly. The Electoral College  is the way America organizes the voting system. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d8be63f9b008,877D0253BD80,Alot of people are like theres no reason for the Electoral College to exist that theres no use when theres a mojority rule. Ask yourself this what if theres a tie we cant have two presidents at one time it would be an abomination. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd3b97dbe4f2,877D0253BD80,The Electoral College will basicaly be the tie breaker. They would be vote to break the tie them selves.    ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5e8d32a9c95,879F248F7934,i think you should stay with Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+04b72e462a0c,879F248F7934,because the Electoral college is a process not a place ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8adae0db010,879F248F7934,"Stated in paragraph 1 it says "" The founding fathers establsihed it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualifed citzens"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6df95f32d9ea,879F248F7934,So in my owns i think what was stated means it should be a tradition and it should stay as a tradition in the American culture ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67110d954d0a,879F248F7934,The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. With that being said that is just like saying you are choosing a president by the most popular votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+52ec4b83174a,879F248F7934,"In paragraph ten it says under the electoral college system , voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75cd934ba669,879F248F7934,To me in the passage the bset argument for you to keep the Electoral College is the electoral college is less work than having everyone vote and round it off for a president to be elected. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b4327e92e7e,879F248F7934,But i'm not going to waste any of your time anymore just know Electoral College would be the best choice for you to choose ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c2789d25b99,87A974F87B12,"Of the new policy of cell phone, students should be allowed to bring cell phones to school, and to be also used only on free time periods like lunch. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+67c7b680c449,87A974F87B12,The reason why students should bring their cell phones is because students can use them for emergencies and other uses like calling their parents to pick them up after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f48e5ea00b7,87A974F87B12,"If phones are used in class, they may get a warning or be taken away by the teacher. When taken by the teacher, they may receive their phone after the class period. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9294e2e3c4d3,87A974F87B12,"When an emergency happens, Students can call their parents or call for help when they are instructed to do so.
+
+Calling their parents can let them know that they are all safe from a natural disaster. Either it is a flood, earthquake, tornado, etc. Students letting their parents know that they are fine shows the responsibility they carry.
+
+Calling parents after school can let them know what time their child gets out of school. When not having a cell phone, certain students have to use the phones in class and/or the ones in the office. If so, they may or may not be able to get out of school on time. Parents always have to make sure they leave on time to know what happens at school and after school.
+
+Having parents to know that their child is doing good in school means that their parents are happy that their child had a grea 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48b049e78e5f,87A974F87B12,The last reason why phones should be brought to school is because that students should enjoy a nice school year. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ca4ae9899ef,87A974F87B12,Having a great school year for students means that they can memorize all the times they had for the year. Letting them know they had fun is that it leaves them with a happy day. It can make kids happy for themselves and the people around them. Also it makes friends closer with one another when they talk about their day. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3dcdfb29837,87A974F87B12,"This is why the policy of having phones ay school for emergencies, parent pick-ups, and the excitement for students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a53710d80c7d,87AF2FEABA83,Some schools thinks that students should attend classes at home. Others might think that attending classes at school will give benefits to the students. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+cc6bfe07dfdb,87AF2FEABA83,Attending classes at school will get the students to learn more subjects than online classes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e21ebe8ca59,87AF2FEABA83,"If students does not attend classes at school there would not be teachers and staffs at the school. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+990a612c586c,87AF2FEABA83,Attending classes at school will get the students to learn more of other subjects. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a223cf764ecb,87AF2FEABA83,"If a student takes classes at home they would not be focusing on their assignment. They going to be on their phone, TV, or other type of devices. There will be no one supervising the students at home. They need teachers to teach them, educate them, and motivate them to learn. Attending classes at school as you can see will benefit the student.. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+922a04cee27d,87AF2FEABA83,"In addition, If the students does not attend classes at school there would not be no teachers and staffs at the school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e8e250226c0,87AF2FEABA83,"Many jobs will be lost due to students taking classes online. Plus, the students needs to build a relationship with the teacher and staffs. Online classes would not teach a student face to face, It would be better If a teacher teaches the student face to face. As a result, there should be teachers and staff at the school, If the student takes classes at the school. Plus, the students will get a better education. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0077a47912b2,87AF2FEABA83,Many people may argue that students should take classes online instead of going to school. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+81a8390bdecf,87AF2FEABA83,"People think that online classes will give the student benefits. They also think that the benefit of taking online classes, is to give the students more opportunity to learn. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a2c3b8d35e2,87AF2FEABA83,"In the other hand, they are people who also believe that taking classes in school is better. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f0b838c174e4,87AF2FEABA83,Schools are meant for students to learn on other subjects. If a student takes classes in school they will have the opportunity to learn much better. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+173658c44c8e,87AF2FEABA83,students should take classes in school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c085ad0681df,87AF2FEABA83,"Schools are meant to be for students to learn from all subjects. Taking classes in school would benefit the students. If the students take classes in school, there will be more teachers and staff at the school. Truly, learning from a teacher helps you a lot, because they are teaching you face to face. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c432e83352c2,87EF1E52C4E6,"In my opinion, I think driverless cars could simply change the world, i don't see many negative aspects of the idea of trying to make a car that a human doesn't need to drive. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+57136806188f,87EF1E52C4E6,I also think that making a driverless car that needs human assitance aswell is pointless ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9875cec337b2,87EF1E52C4E6,"because, the driver would sit there waiting for his turn to drive and that could get really boring for the driver sitting there cautiously waiting when its his turm.
+
+It should be driverless completely or not at all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+174112862e9d,87EF1E52C4E6,"According to the text, they would use the driverless cars as a taxi service, that would help in many ways when people need rides or want to get somewhere quick in a major city and not wait for a bus or train. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6f4490c0db7,87EF1E52C4E6,The biggest concern for the driverless car is the safety hazards and the laws that are set in place. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+92809163af87,87EF1E52C4E6,"The text states that states like, California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have limited use of semi-autonomous cars due to safety issues. A big concern is if you get into a car accident with a driverless car, who is there to blame?
+
+In order for driverless cars to be used they would have to set in liability law changes and who would be be blamed for the accident, as it states in the text. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e2d21f73bd4,87EF1E52C4E6,driving the handicap ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca7046964bc5,87EF1E52C4E6,"the taxi service that drives you where you need to go, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2a069eaf8b4,87EF1E52C4E6,take a nap ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d6fc9917f3eb,87EF1E52C4E6,"driver safety for the passengers, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dcc25acf2efe,87EF1E52C4E6,"will it be safe enough to driver on the street with other driverless cars, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eeaf297e30a0,87EF1E52C4E6,will it be able to drive with this type of technolgy efficiently. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ebbdf8bb277,87EF1E52C4E6,"Based on the information I supplied, I think the driverless car can be a major step in the world, but it can be a very dangerous one if not handled correctly.
+
+According to the text, Tesla announced they would have a car that could drive itself 90 percent of the time by 2016, also Mercedes-Benz and Nissan planned to have cars that can drive themsleves completely by 2020.
+
+The road to the truly autonomous car streches ahead of us it could lead to a bright future that revolutionizes the world, or it could lead to a very dangerous one, but we grow closer to the destination everyday.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+844faa35d168,87F529DB9D27,"Yes, the Electoral College Works because in source one it tells the reader the steps you have to take in order to be able to work. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+115cf5c98bfb,87F529DB9D27,"For example in paragraph five it states how each candidate running for president has his or her own group of electors. It also states that the electors generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but some state laws vary on how electors are selected and for what there responsibilities are. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6d30b75415cb,87F529DB9D27,It is a hard process to go through in order to be a candidate and get voted to be president because people have the right to choose who they want and why they want the person to be president. Some reasons why people want the person to be president are because of the things there going to do like make the country better or improve the government while they are in charge for four years. Reasons why they might not want to choose the person as a president could be because of many reasons. Source two states how some voters do not vote for the president but vote for the slate of the electors who in turn have to elect the president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1629eea3d592,87F529DB9D27,Source three mainly talks about the five reasons to keep our methods of choosing the president. A good example is how in the catogory certainty of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+974eeb7810d9,87F529DB9D27,it states that president Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the elctoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes casted for him and Mitt Romney. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f1cc940aec1,87F529DB9D27,Most voters that end up in swing states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign as it states in paragraph twenty. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+858da7ae5467,87F529DB9D27,"But, big states lose virtue by population. For example Obama who won the vote only got twenty nine electoral votes out of the state of Florida. In Wyoming he only got three electoral votes so this means that larger states get payed more attention than the smaller states do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+64c9a62f8228,87F529DB9D27,"In conclusion the Electoral College does work but, it all depends the how many people vote in each state and how many the electors decide to vote.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5914f96f1e1a,880F6C543080,I believe all students should perform community service ,Position,Effective,,,
+90f87ec0f87b,880F6C543080,Community service is a nice way to helps out . Helping out the community can get you far in life ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cb71d4339b58,880F6C543080,"People that don't help out don't get far in life . Life isn't just about what you want or need . Some people don't get anything they want because they are busy helping others . If people help out the community it would be much cleaner and safe for other children . If there was a park that was dirty and we had some older kids from school help clean it up , it would be a lot safer for those younger children ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a8aadb13afbf,880F6C543080,"You want every child to have a good future and if they learn earlier its much better . Say your child is in the 5th grade and there school is helping clean a beach . Well , later on in life they will be thankful they helped out because everyone wants our beaches nice and clean . ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56f95ef900c4,880F6C543080,Some people are to lazy to help out . If we teach children to help out now they won't be lazy in the future ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7c8c4a9bd8a6,880F6C543080,Some people don't care about their community . That's why people say it takes up to much time because they are being lazy . Helping out the community should be something fun and it doesn't matter how much time it takes up . If its boring to you get a friend to come along with you and help out . The more help the better . ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ff614155a11,880F6C543080,"In the future we don't want our community to be filled with trash and things laying everywhere . We want a nice place to live and grow old . We want a even better future for our children, but if no one helps out then it won't be nice . It will be dirty and unsafe . The more we clean up and help now the better our future will be . That's why I think community service should be required . ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a4382e236e38,881F756EF94A,I think we should change the elction to popular vote ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a8e0ebcfacc4,881F756EF94A,we should get what the people want not what the government or the system want ,Position,Adequate,,,
+82089294c464,881F756EF94A,"under the electoral college system, voters vote not for president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. a dispute over the outcome of an elecoral college vote is possible, it happend in 200 but, its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7f11af783897,881F756EF94A,No region has electoral cotes to elect president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2ffc07fa4aa,881F756EF94A,"So a solid regional favorite, such as romney was in the south has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful presidat. the residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfrabchished that the new president will have no regard for their intrests, that he really isn't their president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f7f38aa0178,881F756EF94A,The winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates as we saw in 2012's election ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+01f44ca0f54f,881F756EF94A,"voters in toss-up states are most likely to pay close attention to the campaign. they are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, average and the most thoughtful voters hsould be the ones to dcide the election.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8baff4475ef4,8842FE99EC98,"The electoral college method is a process that consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the President and the Vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. This means that that people are not directly voting for who they want to be president but voting for an elector that then places a vote. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a comprimise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors, and a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president.
+
+But the other process of voting for a president is what we have now, it is called the popular vote, in which people go to a place where there are machines that you can place your vote for the president you want elected, the person with the most votes becomes the president of the United States and the person that lost the popular vote is elected vice president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f92c9a2f4f96,8842FE99EC98,"You may ask, well what is wrong with the Electoral College system? Well under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e0e6c186eef,8842FE99EC98,Some people are very serious about their choice of the president they take their time to learn what the president could do for them and their state and country. So when that much time is put in to making that vote people would get mad if a person with an entirely different idea just takes their vote and places it wherever they want. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4864f1e7c59a,8842FE99EC98,"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic mothod of selcting a president that should be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+251ae7cfaecf,8842FE99EC98,Since the electoral college is so old I think it is time to ebolish it!    ,Position,Effective,,,
+a331045a4313,888D36BD7FD3,I think students shouldn't have to perform community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+266dcfd39c03,888D36BD7FD3,because students sometimes have issues at home were they cant stay after school for activities ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e185bc156cc2,888D36BD7FD3,One reason they might not be able to do community service is because they might have a love one that is sick at home and they have to be there for there aid. Second reason is because a student might have financial problems at home were they may have to take on a part time job after school to help around the household with payments. The final reason is that student there self may have health issues forbidding them from doing any community service. Those are the reasons why a student may not be able to do community work after school because of personal issues. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+80b03cb847f7,888D36BD7FD3,"Also students shouldn't have to perform community service because they might have other activities, clubs, groups or sport related things happening after school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+49eb57321e25,888D36BD7FD3,One reason is they might be too busy after school everyday to do anything else on the side such as being on a sports team for the town or at school. Second reason is because they might be in a church group that meets everyday to sing or study. The final reason is because a student may just be busy doing regular things like watching a relative after school while their parent or guardian is at work. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e5edb165f843,888D36BD7FD3,Now even though my opinion is no doesn't mean community service shouldn't be done it just shouldn't be forced on students to do. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0ac8f649302c,8892A2EB9E0C,"In 1976 a mars global surveyor image from 1998, and the latest MGS image from 2001. Twenty five years ago a ""human face"" was photographed on Mars. NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was trying to photograph possible landing area for the Viking 1 spacecraft's siter, Viking 2. When they were capturing photos they came across a face. Now you're saying that it was created by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b8ac47554bdc,8892A2EB9E0C,"If it was formed by aliens, Where did the aliens go? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+40d6a1c0ba34,8892A2EB9E0C,"Where did they come from? How do you know for sure that aliens exist there has been no sightings of ""Aliens"". Nothing can live on Mars. If so why are they not still there. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d246264007e,8892A2EB9E0C,"It was a Martian mesa, common enough around Cyndonia, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fa2b4b745ea,8892A2EB9E0C,"it only had ONE unusual shadow. No more than one unusual form. We had researchers, we also had all the right rescources to figure it was only a Martian mesa. Where is your evidence that it was aliens. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc621a3f4d0d,8892A2EB9E0C,It was just a landform that was formed on Mars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7783625b715e,8892A2EB9E0C,They only sent it out to attract attention to NASA. When it did it got way to out of control. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7f9e79aca91,8892A2EB9E0C,"The article also said that ""the camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46e20aad88d2,8892A2EB9E0C,"If a high tech camera can't see through clouds then how could ""Aliens"" see through it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87ef1ff80097,8892A2EB9E0C,"The landform was equivalent of a butte or mesa, those are landforms common around the American West. If it wan't a common landform then maybe I would believe you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e1391f5660e3,8892A2EB9E0C,"It was not ""aliens"" sorry to dissapoint you. If you could please have more research next time, that would be great. Evidence is apart of what we do here at NASA.               ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ac4665819306,88B016E70B03,"The Electoral College shouldn't stay the same, in fact we shouldn't even have it anymor ",Position,Adequate,,,
+86c023685cf1,88B016E70B03,the reasons why we should not keep the Electoral College is because we are voting for electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a22182765e1b,88B016E70B03,the tie that occurs in a election ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+735613b2a286,88B016E70B03,representatives in states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27fed59bf408,88B016E70B03,There is so many problems with our constitution and the Electoral College is one of them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bfcf47765dc,88B016E70B03,in which all the electors in that state gives the president their vote if the majority of the population voted for them. Wouldn't it just be easier if can automatically add up all votes for each president since we are so technologically advanced? I say we just let the people of the United States vote the way we should vote and everything would be easier and there would be less complaints ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2646581d795,88B016E70B03,The House of Representatives is now responsible for the election ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5eebd21dc19,88B016E70B03,The winner-takes-all is also a big problem. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+466399f63cf7,88B016E70B03,"The eclection is basically in the ""Swing"" states because the election is so close. So i guess the smaller the better. ""The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational."" Says Bradford Plumer in the article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b8777b78387,88B016E70B03,"""Wyoming, representating 500,000 voters, would have as much asthe 55 representatives from California, who represents 37 million,"" Says Bradford Plumer in paragraph 12. That makes no sense at all. Why would a smaller state with a smaller population have more votes than a bigger state with a larger population? That is unfair to the citizens of the United States and is unfair in the election ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1ebfafa34629,88B016E70B03,"My arguement for this voting process could continue on. Agree or disagree, you still know that there are tons of problems wrong with the Electoral College. I hope one day it'll change and less talk and arguements will occur, it's time for a new voting process. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6bd2608af118,88BEB108EA83,I think that we should get rid of the eletoral collage and switch to a popular vote system ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d41d095bcf6b,88BEB108EA83,with the popular vote we can get the president we want if more people vote for the same one. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f609292c3c5,88BEB108EA83,"Its fair if you vote for one preisdent but lose the election because more people voted for the other president, but its not fair if more people vote for the same president and still lose due to the eletoral collage ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef064f9d27fe,88BEB108EA83,Now the eletoral collage is good for keeping track of votes but now most of the voting nowadays most of the voting is done off an eletronic device of some sort. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+55fb8577402c,88BEB108EA83,Its not fair that almost all of the states' eletoral collages are winner-take-all. so its like turning the votes around and voting for the other person when you didn't. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a3e4f502270,88BEB108EA83,Thank you for taking the time to read this and I hope to see the rules changing real soon. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7ca99210d564,88E81B040A5A,"Why does electoral college still have its defenders, Abolish the electoral college!... Electoral College was a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a2b77de8bd5b,88E81B040A5A,I am writing to the state senator of florida to argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. ,Position,Effective,,,
+57c6b47f919f,88E81B040A5A,The Electoral College is a way of certainty of outcome. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9aaaee669f9d,88E81B040A5A,Swing states ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3ed729e7d00a,88E81B040A5A,Aviod run-off elections. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+339bf3f554c0,88E81B040A5A,"This has happened before in 2000. In 2012 election, for Obama he received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney, the Republican nominee for president in 2012. electoral votes arenon a winner-takes-all basis. A tie in the nationwide electora vote is possible because the total number of votes 538 is an even number. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a772cfad03a3,88E81B040A5A,"The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign to really listen to the competing candidates knowing that they are going to decide the election. The most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+16e3ffdd4c18,88E81B040A5A,"The Electoral College also aviods the problem of election in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 are good examples, they both only a had 43 percent plurality of the popular votes. Some potential voters who have no hope have less in centive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bd5e275e5c01,88E81B040A5A,"To briefly wrap up I argue in favor for the Electoral Votes to stay because of the certainty of outcome, swing states, and lastly to aviod run-off elections. In some people's opinion's they would disagree, but they will not have enough facts to support why they disagree, because honestly Electoral Votes is always the way to go.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+034147016ead,88FC05DDCC92,"I realize some people may think that community service is a waste of time, a distraction from work or friends and family ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+68c00f91cf5d,88FC05DDCC92,"but I can assure you that community service is greatly needed. It doesn't matter that it may take time away from work or other jobs, we all need to give back now and then. We ,as a community, cant have a ""well-someone-else-should-do-it"" attitude, because if we all thought that then nothing would ever get done ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5d8e6ac9e0d0,88FC05DDCC92,"In these times, when some people are working two jobs just to feed their family, and we have so much extra, it would be selfish and greedy of us not to give back. ",Position,Effective,,,
+673dbc6b5427,88FC05DDCC92,"Community service doesn't have to be boring either, there are lots of fun ways to give back to our community. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bec26b5da12f,88FC05DDCC92,"For example, you could go to a animal shelter and help walk and feed the animals. Or you could go to a nursing home and play games with the seniors there. I'm sure they would also love to have someone sit and just listen to them tell a story or two. There are lots of fun ways to help out that don't include getting dirty or being outside. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c26fc7933473,88FC05DDCC92,But if someone felt like they wanted to do more laborious work then there are other jobs they can do as well. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2686406a67a7,88FC05DDCC92,"They could help clean up garbage at a beach. They could help redo a local park by putting in bark dust or planting trees. Also, they could find a nice local garden or farm that had some jobs that needed to be done. There could be non-profit organizations that need some volunteers with events or charities as well. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e8664094a468,88FC05DDCC92,"think that if you didn't have the students at our school do community service you would be doing them a great injustice. When we are so privileged to have a nice home, clean water, and a meal on the table every night we should at least be able to go out for an our or two and help someone else who isn't as privileged. Its hardly a great burden to get up from the computer or desk you are at, put on a pair of old jeans and a t-shirt, and go out and help. So I ask only one thing of you; please set aside one day, one measly day, to have all of the students in our school wander out into the community and help someone. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+df70910ccbff,89039D21E960,"Though I have not been alive to see most of it, I am sure that the debate on keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote has been going on for ages. Now, the words of a fourteen year old might not mean much to a state senator, especially since it will be four years until I am legally allowed to vote, but please sir, hear me out ",Lead,Effective,,,
+344835cf6280,89039D21E960,I believe that we should keep the Electoral College for many reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+11bf9c7642e4,89039D21E960,"One, if the president was decided by popular vote, our president might not be the best one for the country. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4fdbe55ba672,89039D21E960,"Secondly, if it were up to a popular vote, the president might win, or not win, simply for being a regional favorite. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fcb8df5d7072,89039D21E960,"As stated in the third article, paragraph 20, ""The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates... to focus their campaign effors on the toss-up states."" As you know, toss-up state's make the final vote. Therefore, people in these states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign, and they will be the ones with the most information. If it were up to popular vote, then anyone over the age of 18 could randomly pick a winner. Let's be honest, the majority of eighteen year old's will vote on whoever their friends or family vote for, or even the candidate representing their group (Democratic or Republic). Many people, if the president was decided by popular vote, would make an uneducated decision on one of the canidates, not studying their choices as much as one would with the Electoral College system in place. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+39dff5352d47,89039D21E960,"As stated in the third article, paragraph 19, ""...because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president."" Also in the paragraph, it states that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. If the president was decided by popular vote, however, can you imagine what it would be like? Take Romney, for example. He was a solid regional favorite in the South. Romney knew that there was no incentive to campaign heavily in the South, because he would not gain any electoral votes by increasing his plurilaty in states he knew he would win. If popularity decided the president, residents of the other regions might feel like their vote would not count, and that the president would have no regard for their interests. Say that popularity did actually determine a winner. While most regions might vote for a certain presidents, the ones that did not would feel like that the man running the country wasnt really ""their president"". However, Mr. Senator, if the Electoral College was to stay, this problem would never exist. With the system we have now, the people vote for your state's electors when they vote for the president. Most states also have a ""winner-take-all"" system. Therefore, the canidate with the most votes in a state win's that state's electors. This lets the voting be even, fair. A popular vote would make the voting unfair to those who did not want that president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3785f4f04f7d,89039D21E960,"Now, of course, the other view has to be adressed. As stated in the second article, ""Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning... During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all."" This quote shows that the canidates might not go to a state they know they have no chance in winning. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+004d9e78444a,89039D21E960,"I can see how this could support changing to election by popular vote, and how it could be reasonable. If our president was chosen by popular vote, then he would visit all of the states, trying to win them over. However, there are some strong arguments against this. To begin with, one man would have to visit 50 states, and even if he only visited the majority, there is still a posibility that the state will not vote for him anyways, in the end. If we keep the Electoral College, then the majority of votes in a state would count, not his popularity. As a fourteen year old, I can relate this to highschool. A student can be the most popular student in the school, but they can also be the most rude and mean. And while another student may not be popular, they can be the nicest in the school. If the president was chosen by a popular vote, he might just end up being the worst thing that could happen to the country. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+44c46b602a4d,89039D21E960,"In conclusion, Mr. State Senator, I think that keeping the Electoral College is the best thing for our country. If we changed to election by popular vote, the man (or woman) might not be the best for our country, and the best man might not win because he is not a regional favorite. I hope, sir, that you will take my letter into account when you go to vote on this topic.            ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fd0239648e58,89163FC7FAE8,The Electoral College is a fundamental way of electeing the us persident. It's been in the us for over 200+ years so why change it now. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fb9a02a77bbc,89163FC7FAE8,"It work for the founding fathers George Wsahington, Thomas Jefferson, And Benjamin Franklin. Like they old Quote ""if it ani't broke don't fix it."" ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7b3666b7776e,89163FC7FAE8,Some of the reasons people want to elminate the Electoral College is because the way it works. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5b7e1a787994,89163FC7FAE8,"For example if you live in texas and want to vote for a John Kerry you'd actualy vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to kerry. Who knows if they win the statewide election and go to congress with kerry. And what if ""this so called electors"" don't even have or hold an public office, who are they in the first place and how do they get picked. Many people congressional men and women want the Eletoral college gone because of the close calls it's had to make and some think those pick favored or didn't favor the country. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8159ab6bd739,89163FC7FAE8,Like the 2000 fiasco which was one of the biggest election crisis of the century. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7c9a6e9683ad,89163FC7FAE8,"And not to mention the 1960 of John F Kennedy which many segregationists replaced democratic electors with new ones who would oppose Kennedy. And yet same even oppose their own party's candidate for some they choose. Some states even send two slates with in them it happened in Hawaii in the same election. Thankfully Vice Persident Richard Nixion only validated only his opponent's electors, made sure to do so without giving up a percent. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+374090005009,89163FC7FAE8,But still people say a state like California whos population is apromximently 35 million people and 2 senates get to have the say over them that's what may make it difficult. Rhode island aswell because they only have a minimal population so they are not off so bad like others. And what about the now large amount of illeagal emmagints whom can't get a vote because of citizenship. They need it to vote and the ones who can offten don't know who they're voting for ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad2d4b7925a1,89163FC7FAE8,At most basic level it seems unfair because of the winner-take-all system. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+34f828d75f90,89163FC7FAE8,I say keep it because if the Electoral College vote ties then then the US House of Rep. and the Senate choose the winners. The House The Persident and the Senate the Vice Persident. You are the one who choose those who govern you not them so therefore choose whom you want and give them the benefit of the doubt.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87633b9d011b,896F322AE281,"I think Policy 1 is better, because then you can bring your brand-new phone you got from a celebration or for a reward. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+87bea395a8ed,896F322AE281,"Policy 2 says cell phones are not allowed , then what is the reason to have a phone if your not allowed to have it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd6ec33f4632,896F322AE281,"Lets say your parent/parents are being held up and can't pick you up from school, so then somebody else has to pick you up or take the bus home. You play for the school's baseball team and a last minute game was scheduled and you have to play today in 30 minutes, but your parent/parents doesn't know so how are going to get a ride home. You have to get your or borrow somebody else phone to call him/her. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+154306f9f31e,896F322AE281,"There is a bomb threat and the terr says if the police comes the school will blow up, so you have to secretly call the police tell them what the person said and the information he/she is giving while the teacher is asking questions. The police finds out who the person is and tracks the call and arrest the terrorist. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab84412af4e6,896F322AE281,"There is a fire and somebody was hurt, so you or somebody has to call the 9-1-1 to put the fire and see if the victim was seriously hurt. there was an earthquake and somebody broke their leg and you are trapped with the victim, so you have to call 9-1-1. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16d94306586b,896F322AE281,"That is why you should use Policy 1. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6ad5fd6169f4,89AB334EE7ED,I'm writing this letter to inform you on my thoughts and positions on requiring students to perform community service ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e0a996fb4dff,89AB334EE7ED,I would first like start by saying that community service is a great thing. without a good community and those who help we have no community. I agree that students should be required to perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+466a3684acbc,89AB334EE7ED,Community service teaches the youth of the importance of having a strong community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+efbaca52fbe0,89AB334EE7ED,It also teaches how to take care of our community when we grow up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b37876c1168f,89AB334EE7ED,Another strong point is to give back. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8b157dc13f84,89AB334EE7ED,"As kids we get everything we want without giving back. Lets show the adults how well rounded are communities youth is. By doing things as simple as community car pooling or just picking up garbage we decrease our pollution in the air which would make this a safer place to live. students such as myself should be assumed to help the community out, also we shouldn't be rewarded with material things for helping our community. Reading to kindergartner's should warm anybodies heart. Knowing that we made some sort of a difference in our community is reward enough. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cee5df43de8a,89AB334EE7ED,Principal I think I've made my point clear. Are youth should have to perform community service. It wouldn't take away all our free time and it would help our community in so many ways. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c8b64938efc1,89C55AA2CA12,How many kids do community service in your school? A lot of kids in my school do community service at school. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e9b9068159da,89C55AA2CA12,"Also, most kids participate in sporting events outside of school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+56fcc35a5a70,89C55AA2CA12,"Finally, kids should only be forced to do community service if they do something bad. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+761dff8a6380,89C55AA2CA12,Community service shouldn't be required for students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f40ca12f04e,89C55AA2CA12,"Like everyone says ""practice makes perfect"" and if the kids doing sports don't practice they will get worse at the sport and wont ever exceed. The coach might not have many players and if half of his kids are doing community service he will have to forfeit the game. There is one reason why students shouldn't have to do community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+37f1a0e9b235,89C55AA2CA12,Every kid does community service every day without even knowing that they are doing it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7483a5b17a6,89C55AA2CA12,"if they play sports, they are doing community service. Also if they help someone out they are doing community service. Finally the students are doing community service just by showing up to school. That is just one more reason why the students shouldn't have to do community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bdcfd6f80c6d,89C55AA2CA12,"Like i said before, students do community service all the time without even knowing they are doing it. Most of the kids that do bad stuff just laugh at the punishments the school gives now. So if they were doing community service it would waste there time and if one of there friends saw them they would be embarrassed. There is the third reason why students shouldn't have to do community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d44aa60ffa78,89C55AA2CA12,Community service shouldn't be required for students. Only the bad kids should have to do community service. Every kid does community service without knowing they are. A lot of kids play sports and would have to miss them to do the community service. That is why students shouldn't have to do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+599108dcfd80,89CE2C3E8E32,Growing up most all of us have watched cartoons with self driving cars or movies with the idea of a car that can drive itself. But can you imagine if that idea could soon become real? Google and many other companys have been trying at this idea for years and have been very succseful with the expirement. The idea of a self driving car has snagged the attention of many people and especially Google who have acaully made this come true in 2009 when they made the first self driving car. These cars a have drove all over without a single acident reported. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ff8a8e53db46,89CE2C3E8E32,"So as you can imagine this sparks the question, Are self driving car safer on the roads then normals car? Well self driving car all based on sensors that detect anything and everything in the road. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e33d5d59adc,89CE2C3E8E32,"They keep with the speed limit adamatically, stop at aproprited time and also slow down when is needed. Adomatic cars will reduce the amount of accidents we have on the road by a lot. Accident are moslty caused by a driver, with adomatic cars, they will stop quicker than a person has time to react. But this plan will only work if everyone gets a smart car. Say if three out of four people get a smart car there will still be some normal cars left on the road, which with those cars an aciddent can be made. Self driving cars can avoid all the natural accident such as an animal running in the road or bad weather conditons. In addition to that many driver become sleepy or distracted when it come to driving, when self driving car are machines that will not do that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c708ff7db243,89CE2C3E8E32,With self drving cars there will be no need to get a license. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49a5499454c1,89CE2C3E8E32,Many teens struggle with passing the lenglthy test to get your license. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+32c5ed5604ef,89CE2C3E8E32,As people age one of the most common things to get bad is eye sight ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc11d563053c,89CE2C3E8E32,This self driving cars elders can still do the things they need to do such as go to the store or visit family with have to relie on other people for tranportation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65d166b5c213,89CE2C3E8E32,Self driving cars are going to be the safest option on the roads today ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b53c3bbf0972,89CE2C3E8E32,"They aviod accidents, reduce the cost of normal veichals and are more efficent than normals cars. This is why these self driving google car should be developed. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1010b0367d16,89FCD2B81990,"The whole purpose of democracy is to create a government that reflects the desires, opinions, and attitudes of the people being governed, but how can this be achieved if the people aren't fairly represented during election time, presidential or otherwise? This is the problem with the Electoral College system; it puts all of decision-making power in the hands of our electors, not the citizens themselves. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+60d8181ba01c,89FCD2B81990,"To begin with, the electors selected by citizens are capable of defying the will of the people they were chosen to represent. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6a0083d4f51a,89FCD2B81990,"Next, in the case of a tie, the opinions of millions of people would be overlooked. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d02142f863b3,89FCD2B81990,"Finally, because the Electoral College encourages candidates to focus on obtaining votes instead informing all voters about their intentions, only the influential ""swing"" states receive enough attention from candidates to make a well-informed decision when voting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6516d09954d1,89FCD2B81990,"When it comes to something as serious as the fate of our country, citizens cannot put their faith in the such a corrupt system as the Electoral College. ",Position,Effective,,,
+48e3f312e106,89FCD2B81990,"First of all, the Electoral College system creates a window of opportunity for ""faithless"" electors to take advantage of the power given to them by society during the voting process. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ae44917281a3,89FCD2B81990,"Under the Electoral College, voters do not vote directly for who they want as president, but instead for a slate of electors, who in turn select the president. Although these electors may pledge themselves to a particular candidate, there is no way to determine whether or not they end up casting their vote according to the will of the people who put them in charge. Such an unpredictable turn of events could be avoided if only the outcomes of presidential elections were determined by popular vote, not through an Electoral College. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f513c264a97f,89FCD2B81990,"Secondly, if a tie were to occur, the opinions of countless citizens would be ignored. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b9deb404a84f,89FCD2B81990,"In this case, the election would be thrown to the House of representatives, were delegates from each state would vote on the president. Since each state has only one vote to cast, a vote from a state containing 500,000 people would carry the same weight as a vote representing the opinions of 35 million. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for Congress, the selection made by the House of Represenatives can hardly be expected to respesent the will of the people.    ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bc2ca17c4d49,8A3F92425ECC,"lets talk about Electoral college. do you know what it is? electoral college is a process not a place. electoral college is the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. the process consists of a selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the electoral votes by congress. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6c61b7f8b895,8A3F92425ECC,i think that the congress is making a good dicision on keeping it this way to elect the presedent. so if you think the same good. because thats one way our socity is a step closer on becoming the perfect socity. do you think so?    ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+214ce822e2d2,8A60E09A7062,"Driverless cars, are they all they are made out to be? I think not. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+49913dfd919f,8A60E09A7062,The reason being is because it still needs a driver. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+80e472ceb1a4,8A60E09A7062,It watches the driver instead of the road. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0a74e2201e7a,8A60E09A7062,And you have to be alert at all times. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+62d440b2148b,8A60E09A7062,"This ""driverless car"" should not be called a driverless car. This car still needs a driver. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8ec6f0783c3e,8A60E09A7062,"Say your close to a wreck, the ""driverless car"" will alert you saying it needs you to drive around the wreck. do you really want a non driverless driverless car? I know iI do not. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+16bfc92c8139,8A60E09A7062,This car also watches the driver. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f4ca938974a4,8A60E09A7062,"If it is watching the driver how is it watching the road? It cant do both at once. This is absurd. This car is just not as good as they made it out to be, in my opinion. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cdb4a61f5eeb,8A60E09A7062,According to paragraph eight you have to be alert at all times. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b04e6e8393ac,8A60E09A7062,"Since this car still needs a driver this car can alert you that you need to take the wheel at any given time. Therefore, if you buy this car be very alert. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+939927e47e3f,8A60E09A7062,"In conclusion, I would not buy this driverless car for myself because A. it still needs a driver. B. it watches the driver instead of the road. And C. you have to be alert at all times.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+78052036d57b,8A63149E402C,Going to school back and forth can be exhausting and inconvenient so wouldnt distance learning be a decent alternative? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4d345249f977,8A63149E402C,"No, distance learning would not benefit the student ",Position,Effective,,,
+433eccc01c6d,8A63149E402C,"it would make it harder to make meaningful relationships, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+55bb6a7d8b4f,8A63149E402C,the courses would change ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b3bfdd55625b,8A63149E402C,"it would be easier to become distracted during schoolwork. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+7d205fcbbebb,8A63149E402C,My first reason for why students would not benefit from distance learning is that it would make it harder to make meaningful relationships. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+39fa13418d91,8A63149E402C,"For example in my own life I have made some of my best friends through the public school system. In third grade I met a kid named Generic_Name and over the years because we went to the same school we became close friends and he even hooked me up with a job last summer. In seventh grade I had a less than desirable English teacher whose monotone voice made him sound like he came straight out of a charlie brown cartoon. Because of him I met a guy named Generic_Name who I quickly befriended because our shared hate toward our English teacher, and now I get a free movie sometimes when Generic_Name is on staff at the Regal movie theater, who I never would have meet if we didnt go to the same school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ef1a8160231e,8A63149E402C,"On the other hand there are people that believe it is possible to be connected and make new relationships online, and even though it is possible to do so ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9cd50c67828c,8A63149E402C,their reasoning is flawed due to the fact that it is always easier to make new relationships through face to face physical contact. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+1eb157896cae,8A63149E402C,"Someone who exemplifies this fact perfectly is my friend Generic_Name who I met in middle school. In middle school Generic_Name was my best friend, but this changed when she moved and her parents decided to have her take an online schooling program. While she does well in the course she has told me that she misses going to a physical school where she can actually see people because it is harder to make friends due to the nature of the online course and because of the online course whenever I do get to see her she is way more socially awkward than she used to be. All in all distance schooling not only makes it more difficult to make meaningful relationships but because of the lack of those meaningful relationships it makes it even more difficult to learn the intricacies of social interaction. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f571cc30f3e1,8A63149E402C,Another reason for why students would not benefit from distance learning is that the nature of the courses that we take would change for the worse. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f2cfe3921dc,8A63149E402C,For example In my ninth grade biology class we had to dissect a frog and organize it's organs. During the assignment I learned more about that frog than I could anywhere else because of the hands on nature of the assignment. This just goes to show that if we started using distance learning courses they would miss out on the hands on portion of learning. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+90e23d9372c9,8A63149E402C,"On the other side of the argument there are those that believe the hands on portion of learning is not very important, and that might apply for some people ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fb7a5aaa2c6d,8A63149E402C,"however buy in large the hands on part is extremely important due to the fact that everyone learns differently whether it be auditory, visual, or hands on. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+195f3b147d53,8A63149E402C,"Someone who demonstrates this fact excellently is my friend Generic_Name. I met Generic_Name sophomore of high school in my chemistry class, and during this class we were given a lot of lab assignments with a paper packet to go with it. During these assignments I would understand most of the work given to us while Generic_Name was a little more lost, and while I tried to help him through the packet he could never fully contemplate the complex design of the stapled pieces of paper, but this all changed once we got to the hands on section. As soon as we got to the hands on portion of whatever lab we were doing it was almost as if he was a completely different person, I would stand back and watch in awe as he took perfect measurements, solving complicated math equations, and just dominating the lab overall. So in the end distance learning would not only take away amazing hands on activities but by doing so would prevent us from learning how we learn whether it be Auditory, Visual, or hands on. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7832c43ee044,8A63149E402C,My last reason for why students would not benefit from distance learning is that it would make it even easier to be distracted from working. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b905aa87f6ab,8A63149E402C,"For example whenever I am at home doing my math homework and I am getting particularly bored with it it is very easy to ""take a quick break"". This could mean anything from a two minute glass of water or a five hour nap depending on how I am feeling. So if I took a online course I would have to face this same dilemma with every assignment I am given. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ae91116481f8,8A63149E402C,On the other side of the fence there are some people that believe that they are very studious and would never have a problem like this. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a449c4a82c77,8A63149E402C,"While I get where they are coming from, their reasoning is still wrong ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bdf0d0b18c90,8A63149E402C,"because even if they are the most studious person in the world that temptation to become distracted will still always be there. Someone who demonstrates this perfectly is my friend Generic_Name. Generic_Name is probably one of the most hard working people I have ever known, not only does he take high level courses for his age but he also does track all while being home schooled. Not only will he deny every offer of a hangout but he will also stay up way later than he should just to finish his latest assignment, but even though he does all of these things I will occasionally catch him logging into Minecraft when I know he shouldnt be, and because of this he usually has awful time management skills. This just goes to show how distance learning not only makes it easier to become distracted because of how convenient it is but also how it enforces bad study habits because of the lack of a classroom. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ef6a4f901d2,8A63149E402C,"
+Distance learning in theory is a great idea because of how convenient it is, but the main reason why distance learning would not benefit students is because of how convenient it is. So to sum up schools should stay the way they are and not offer any distance courses because of how it would change what we are able to learn. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e79dd310ed3f,8A745CBCD81E,students can benefit from being able to attend classes from home. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb57958d1757,8A745CBCD81E,"students could learn better in the comfort of their own homes, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69827ecf0531,8A745CBCD81E,"benefit from no distractions, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ca7b4db62f8,8A745CBCD81E,attending online classes can help students with social differences. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e51d04f581b,8A745CBCD81E,Therefore being comfortable can help your work ethic. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+423d01f0b9f2,8A745CBCD81E,"When in the comfort of your own home it's better to study, read, and stay focused. For example around students or an area your uncomfortable with can stop you from doing your best. But if you are in a environment that your more comfortable with you can work better. When your comfortable you learn better. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+636c233670a9,8A745CBCD81E,Secondly the ability to benefit from home with no distraction is more cable then being in a school setting with distraction. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9c702d7e3b21,8A745CBCD81E,For example you can choose where and when to learn in your home with no distraction at all. But in school the options are scares. When a student is surrounded by a lot of other students and staff the drive to stay focus can be limited. There also could be students who stop classes from learning by being very distracting tends to being at home with no distraction at all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18f142b271c2,8A745CBCD81E,In addition attending online classes could help students with social differences. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+44283a69e23e,8A745CBCD81E,Sometimes students may have a problems speaking up or asking a question when confused because the pace of the class is way to fast. For example students with social differences can have trouble communicating in uncomfortable places. They can even have a panic attack when put on the spot to answer a question or present in front of the class. Instead taking online classes would really benefit. You wouldn't even have to worry about these things. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+898c3094bcf2,8A745CBCD81E,"In conclusion I do think attending classes from home can benefit a student. For the same reason as students learning better in the comfort of their homes, having no distractions, and the fact that it can help a student with social differences. I believe attending classes from home can help in many different ways such as the ones that I included in my statement today. Thanks for reading and hearing my position on this issue. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8078a74df96f,8A8F6BCA1D23,In reference to our state we would prefer keeping the electoral college instead of abolishing it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+527c5ef73e95,8A8F6BCA1D23,"Under the 23 Amendment of the constitution, the district of columbia is allocated three electors and treated like a state for pupose of the Electoral college ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+55b229ca4ef0,8A8F6BCA1D23,"If you take this away, there will be anarchy all around us, and I assure you that you dont want this to happen.
+
+The electoral college is a right for us, and it lets us know that we have a right, and a say in this country. It would be wrong to take that away from us. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f6871ddc24f4,8A8F6BCA1D23,"What have Richard nixon, Jimmy carter, Bob dole, and the AFL-CIO all, in their own time, agreed on? They all agreed on abolishing the electoral college ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+509e0a559502,8A8F6BCA1D23,"And they are not the only one's who have said it. According to the gallup poll in 2000, shortly after Al Gore, thanks to the quirks of the electoral collge, won the popular vote but lost because of the 60% of his voters prefered a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+749bc5f55669,8A8F6BCA1D23,"And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e6deb5e7049b,8A8F6BCA1D23,I urge you to please consider your peoples feelings on this matter and consider not abolishing the electoral college. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3a7eb78d1774,8AC3B251DDDF,I believe that the Electoral College should stay. ,Position,Effective,,,
+783479109df2,8AC3B251DDDF,"I believe this because even though many people think of it as a horrible way to have presidential elections, it's probably more effective this way. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c4e37fdbdc2d,8AC3B251DDDF,"When people first hear about the Electoral College, they automatically assume that they don't matter to the election, that everything is taken care of by the Electoral College, that if they didn't vote, nothing would change. Now if 1 or 2 people actually had this mentality, then it wouldn't matter, but it's not just 1 or 2 people, it's a pretty big amount of the American population. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b24b758ded8,8AC3B251DDDF,The Electoral College seems as though our government wouldn't stand for this. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+79b7090b2ba2,8AC3B251DDDF,"As I stated before, the people feel as though their vote doesn't matter. This is not true. The Electoral College only work if people vote. They need the people's votes so that they know which groups are voting for which candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c91403fc2d5a,8AC3B251DDDF,"Now of course, this system is flawed. There will always be flaws in every system that humans do. We haven't yet to have made anything flawless, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+528ec2683bc2,8AC3B251DDDF,the Electoral College has far less flaws than the vote by the general population. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+702970533a64,8AC3B251DDDF,"I assume that the entire voting system, no matter how much we change it for better, will always be flawed and have the most flaws because we are choosing the leader of our nation. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9b028029c98a,8AC3B251DDDF,Someone somewhere will always do something wrong or figure out how to cheat the system in some way. The Electoral College is going to be the best way to handle this situation for a while. The people need to realize that their vote does matter ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+287ac8fdee16,8AC3B251DDDF,"except in the case of Democrats in Texas, Republicans in California, etc.) ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d1570407df8b,8AC3B251DDDF,People need to understand that the Electoral College is the best way to go. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b2d71e789e5,8AC3B251DDDF,This whole situation about believing whether or not the Electoral College should remain should be non-existent. People just don't understand that this is the best way to go so that the vote is as fair as possible and that the votes won't come in by the thousands. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bd29f357a582,8AEFE911A7ED,"We have to do our best to make it correctly. We have to follow the rules. We have to know how to make something, before we help them. If we all helping other community, they all going to help us too ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bd3b85190986,8AEFE911A7ED,"If we helping a community, it's very important, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c899d8b86e93,8AEFE911A7ED,"if we don't help them they don't know who help them. They don't what going on to us. they don't what happened to us. If we help them, next time they going to us back. If we don't help any community, then how other know we help them then. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40451d791ed8,8AEFE911A7ED,"We can help them, we have to talk to them, we have to teach them how to help other people ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dfaf58b07f70,8AEFE911A7ED,"We have to tell them, you have to help other community next time. In my country, when other person help you, next time you have to help them back too. We love to help another community ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+812c4eaf8916,8AEFE911A7ED,"We need to help other community, we don't care if they going to help us or not. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8d4858a84067,8AEFE911A7ED,If we help them first then they know who help them. Next time they going help us back too. We have to help them first. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3892009a1b90,8AEFE911A7ED,"In United states, they don't need for help. they know how to do something, they know to make something nice and strong before they can help other community. They just help other community. who is the poor family, They give food, they give rice, and they give all of stuff they have. They love to help other community ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8e20d9edeb92,8B095EB24288,Students would be benefit from being able to attend to classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c0e2eec689df,8B095EB24288,"because some students have to work, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7cfdc33b4bf,8B095EB24288,they have family ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bbfe1198375,8B095EB24288,others live far away. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91706654acc2,8B095EB24288,First of all students would be benefit from being able to attend to classes from home because some have to work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f52d6dc78ce3,8B095EB24288,"and they dont have time to attend to school because of their schedule. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6e1285be4b4c,8B095EB24288,"Second reason is that students would be benefit from being able to attend to classes from home because they have family, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bc0fdc58e21,8B095EB24288,that could be a problem for them since they could have kids and have to take care of them and being able to study from their houses it's a great a option for them. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8a800aef51c0,8B095EB24288,"And last reason, because others live far away. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f53082044e6,8B095EB24288,"sometimes students dont have transportation because of their location or maybe they don't even have school in the area, and online classes it's an good advantage for them and good opportunity to study. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e1dfea2de012,8B095EB24288,"In conclusion online courses have many great opportunities and good advantage for students, and some of the reasons are: because some students have to work, they have family, and others live to far away ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3fb3f23d53d3,8B24D2970F52,I am aware that you may take the action of making community service a requirement to all students. This action is inevitably going to cause controversy among students ,Lead,Effective,,,
+f856b97e8a34,8B24D2970F52,I for one am very against this upcoming decision. ,Position,Effective,,,
+d5f415168292,8B24D2970F52,"Not only would this cause disruption, but it is also unfair ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9580514c38c9,8B24D2970F52,will be just like forcing students to work using physical means to receive a good grade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c52c439c959,8B24D2970F52,"Now then lets take a dive into what your pending decision would impact upon us. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fac643722c3d,8B24D2970F52,"Lets face it many students do not or would not opt to participate in community service, its just unavoidable ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3cc788b902b3,8B24D2970F52,Many or a majority of the students would refuse to partake in this service. I doubt i would not hear complaints about this very soon. who knows what actions those who opposes being required for service would take? They might use various as well as dangerous means to let their voices be heard. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4b22d76c4c1,8B24D2970F52,"Although not on a serious level like something like slaves would be, but this is the united states of
+
+America. We should have the right to refuse community service, and let the voluntary people do the work that they want to partake in. Again as stated before think of what those who oppose would take not only during the pre-anger state of mind before doing service but during the service. They could do the opposite of what they are asked to do during the activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d84b718cabbf,8B24D2970F52,We already have physical education to make us do physical work for a letter grade. Although P. E does this to some extent community service would be outrages. Sweating for an A ? I quite frankly do not think so. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+94298bf6de4b,8B24D2970F52,"Is that enough for you? Is that enough to make you postpone or abort this decision? Well if you want to have rebels around the school you obviously do not. hey, or maybe if you want to accomplish the opposite of your original goal ,do it. If you want to be the principle who accepted this offer to make us do unfair activities, well then go right ahead. I think i have proven my point in bold fashion, do you disagree? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+11434e77d01e,8B4BBB3F601D,"I truly have no opinion on the electoral college and whether or not to keep it, but as this topic insists I must write my own opinion to you and here is what I think. Even with this article sort of informing me on this topic I still seem to have a misunderstanding (or no understanding) of what the Electoral College really is or what it does. Perhaps this is because of the lack of information I'm given about our government, or perhaps its because what the electoral college does is quite irrelevant to me and my fellow peers. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6f338724c9ae,8B4BBB3F601D,"From what I have gathered though, the electoral college is a group of people that citizens vote for and these people are then allowed to elect a president? I am sure there is a lot more to it but from that statement which is proven true by the article, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef1749b78f26,8B4BBB3F601D,"I think the electoral college is dumb. Instead of electing biased people to choose a biased president, why can't we just let the citizens elect a president; someone who appeals to us and not a large group of people that get hated on all the time. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+030197bd62d8,8B4BBB3F601D,By having the electoral college it's like the government is lying to us. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c63dabe983bf,8B4BBB3F601D,"Oh hey, we believe our citizens are the REAL people in charge of this country, but we aren't going to ever take off their training wheels."" Our government hasn't actually said that. but it's the kind of vibe majority of Americans get. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36f08542ad78,8B4BBB3F601D,"However, there are probably plus sides to the Electoral college as well. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+74f6062320b1,8B4BBB3F601D,"Most people when they don't end up with the results that they weren't hoping for, will question and occuse the oppoing side. As a result of this, elections run by popular vote would always turn into a huge drama infused battle, with the losing side accusing the winning side. This could result in uneccessary recounts; delaying us of a president for even longer than it should. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a72d71f381bb,8B4BBB3F601D,"As I said in the beginning though, I really have no opinion on this matter nor do I truly care. What I think is we should keep things fair for our citizens but also plan ahead and think of the possible negative outcomes that could come from whatever we end up doing. So, should we keep the Electoral College? Well that's a matter that I feel should be discussed by other people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bce725d4c82c,8B5A7E5D7BB5,I would keep the Electoral Collage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b6b0bba77ffd,8B5A7E5D7BB5,"So we can still vote for President and also Vice President. The Electoral Collage consists of 538 electors. Majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state puposes of ElectoralCollage.
+
+Each candidate running for President has his or her own group of electors. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. You vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. Most states have a ""winner take all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.
+
+After the presidential election, your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with with the names of their respective electors. Your state's Certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election.
+
+The Electoral Collage is windely regared as anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed however it is entirly possible that the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Electoral Collage avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. For example Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only 43  percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral Collage 301 and 370 electoral votes respectively.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42a120f13328,8B64BA63E623,"
+A lot of chatter about weather the president should be elected by electoral college or by popular vote is going around my school for the past couple of weeks, and i can't help but to give my own opinion about this argument. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0c642786590c,8B64BA63E623,"I believe that the popular vote should descide who is the president. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+5b3a0fb1e322,8B64BA63E623,"I believe this because of two reasons. One, the citizens are the ones that are going to have to deal with this good or bad president for four years and possibly eight years ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c3088181ee8,8B64BA63E623,"Also the satate senators can be bribed by one or the other candidates running for president. This candidate could have the worst plans for the next four years and all because he cheated to win. This could cause riots and uprawrs around the United States. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+74dc20b06fe4,8B64BA63E623,"Two, Electoral College is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3febb06ff480,8B64BA63E623,"What this means is that candidates are not going to focus on the staes that they know they wont get any votes from. for example in source tw, during the campain of 2000, sevebnteen states were not visited by either candidates so they didn't get to see any campain ads. this is unfair because it makes it harder, alomost impossible for these states to choose on who to vote for because they had no presentations to choose from. this puts to much power in the candidates hands. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+167b4e0e0676,8B64BA63E623,"Some may believe otherwise. For example, since the Electoral votes are from very experienced people that have put there life and time into knowing about what is right and wrong. they are much more experience than the normal citizens ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bd7b0508fa67,8B64BA63E623,"Also Electoral College prevents run-off elections to occur. for example in source three, the electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes casted. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c03e32f316dd,8B64BA63E623,"This causes lots of pressure which would greaatly complicate the presidential election process. With Electoral Collage, this produces a clear winner. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+56ed389ac5f7,8B64BA63E623,"In my own opinion the one that decideds the winner is popular votes. There can still be Elector Collage votes, but the Electoral votes have to much power and is unfair to the citizens of the united states.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+584a5ae4eaba,8B7A871FC14B,"The electoral college is a process,not a place. are founding fathers established it so that congress and election of the president by popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral college consists of the selection of the electors where they vote for the president vice president an the counting of the electoral votes by congress. thew number of electoral college consists of 538 electors. majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2fd893232485,8B7A871FC14B,Why do the state of senator wish to take away electoral college votes? because they think there is to much voting bc under the electoral college system voters vote not just for the president but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe823bd07a85,8B7A871FC14B,but who pick the electors? who are the electors? the electors can be anyone that not holding public officean they pick the electors by the state. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+deb602d63050,8B7A871FC14B,voters sometimes get confused about electors and vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d0fdd8d5255,8B7A871FC14B,But the outcome of all this is that electoral college vite is possible an its less likely to dispute over the popular vote. A electoral vote is possible because the total number of vites is 538 is an even number. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32d32be99e98,8B7A871FC14B,So to rap it all up it can be argued that the electoral collge method of selecting the president may turn off pontenial voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying for their state. voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b8194be2c619,8B7A871FC14B,so state senator i think we should keep the electoral college.                                                    ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9c6441a3f7c9,8BA0BFC49C4F,The policy I think you should put in affect is the first policy that allows students to have their cell phones in school but it cannot be present or used during class times. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+da05b25354de,8BA0BFC49C4F,I choose this policy because it seemed reasonable. From pass experiences I found myself in situations where I needed to use my cell phone and I wasn't able to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+909da50f6fc3,8BA0BFC49C4F,One reason why she shouldn't pick the second policy the one that says no phones at all is because of safety. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84ea4638d328,8BA0BFC49C4F,What if one doesn't take the school bus and left their t-bus money home how are they going to reach their parents and tell them they have no money? Little situations like this can happen everyday and this may cause frustration among parents and guardians. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1092b3a159c9,8BA0BFC49C4F,The second reason is because the second policy is just unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8be017e16e66,8BA0BFC49C4F,"From the pictures I've seen in the video not all the students were on their phones. Some were actually doing their work so putting policy number two would just make innocent people suffer. School is a place of learning new things and experiencing things you wouldn't at home so if students want to text and talk on their phones I say, let them because their futures are in their hands and if they want to talk to their friends and text about what boys they are going out with or what they are doing after school I think that's their problem. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43fb5b916740,8BA0BFC49C4F,"Take it from a student, most rules are broken so I really doubt students aren't going to stop bringing their phones to school for example in our school gum isn't allowed but students continue to bring gum and chew it in school the rules and the detention doesn't stop them. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+87303ee2f3c5,8BA0BFC49C4F,But if you make something reasonable and fair maybe the usage of phone doing school hours will stop. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+877e0bcba235,8BA0BFC49C4F,"It's 2011 thing are changing many teens and now kids have phones. I'm pretty sure the reason their parents bought it for them is for communication, with them I may add. So if you take that away who will they be able to communicate during a emergency. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93864c422d83,8BA0BFC49C4F,Yes some students misuse their ability to use phones but you shouldn't everyone. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7f1c54a8fb75,8BCA72A4D66C,"Dear state senator, I am wriitting you this letter to argue about removing the Electoral college. ",Position,Effective,,,
+ee39eb495f02,8BCA72A4D66C,Using the electoral college has caused some disrruption when its it comes to the votes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+22e4dec87658,8BCA72A4D66C,"From the article ""The indefensible electoral college"" it says that ""under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors"". Who are the electors? well anyone can be an elector not holding public office. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? no. these are one of the reasons to remove the electoral college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b5ab0ee03b9f,8BCA72A4D66C,"Also, the electoral college should be removed because of the 2000 voting fiasco that happened. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9d9cb22dfc53,8BCA72A4D66C,"from the article ""The indefensible electoral colllege"" it says it was the biggest election crisis in the century"". Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for  picking electors, and that those electors wioll always defy the will of the people. If we the people vote for our choice to run this country their should not be any of these fiascos. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+93fe2dabb0ad,8BCA72A4D66C,"Next, even presidents, AFL-CIO in their time have aggreed with this. they all want to remove the electoral college. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cc534154c17f,8BCA72A4D66C,"according to the article a gallup pole in 2000, taken shortly after Algore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but won the presidency, over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take all system in each state, canidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d794afe17cad,8BCA72A4D66C,"after that 2000 fiasco why would you still have have the electoral college. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+61859c87c950,8BCA72A4D66C,"In conclusion, these are my reasons why the electoral college should be removed. first, you wont know what elector you are voting for. Next, the 2000 fiasco. Finally, because it is unfair, outdated and irrational.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f26efaa40e03,8BD74B7B3DE2,The opportunity to attain a new style of education such as online schooling should be taken ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fe3cd890e4aa,8BD74B7B3DE2,"If students dont live near any schools that can provide a good education they can do online classes for a better school, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6e7493e8e5e3,8BD74B7B3DE2,"If a student is sick they dont have to miss any class work and have their grade effected, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+489f1232129e,8BD74B7B3DE2,"And if a student has to leave their town they would be able to keep up with their work. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+a6dbc9431a2e,8BD74B7B3DE2,"Some students who live near lower quality school wont get a very good education, But if they had online classes they would have an opportunity to learn at a higher level. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b16657e81dcb,8BD74B7B3DE2,"Generic_Name lives in a low income area of where he lives and his education is not going the best but with online schooling he could receive education from elsewhere. There are millions of students just like Generic_Name that just want a better education, and with online school this is possible. This isnt just low income areas many schools in higher income areas give poor educations too. Generic_Name lives in north Dakota and there are NO schools in his area but with online classes he could attend online school in a different state. Rather than living near a low quality school Generic_Name dose not live near any schools at all. With online schooling Generic_Name could get the education he needs to be a success in the modern world. In conclusion online schooling give learning opportunities to those who would not normally receive them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d48c459894d4,8BD74B7B3DE2,"Students all over the united states and the world get sick everyday, But with online classes obstacles such as these would not be as detrimental. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1ff98903475f,8BD74B7B3DE2,"In October Generic_Name missed two weeks of school because he had the flu and couldnt leave his bed but if he would have had online classes he could just have done them from home and not have had his grades impacted so severely. Like many others Generic_Name had become sick and had to miss school and many assignments if he would have been able to do his classes online There would have been little to no impact. If more schools would pick up online schooling there would not be incidents like this anymore. Generic_Name recently got back from a trip to France with his family and unfortunately was infected with COVID-19 ( Coronavirus) and now he will have to miss an extended period of school and be quarantined meaning he cant receive an education, But if he could do his work online he would be able to continue to receive an education while quarantined. This being a much more serious scenario of missing school that as of right now schools should start to take into consideration, none the less having online school would solve one of the problems this child is facing. Both of these students could have their grades remain intact if there was online schooling. In conclusion there would be no more need for sick days if when a student is sick they can just work from home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+684ae9ba63e9,8BD74B7B3DE2,If a student has to leave town for one reason or another they would still receive an education along as they had access to a computer ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f9305fbbd63,8BD74B7B3DE2,"Generic_Name went on vacation to Generic_City with her family four days before spring break started so she missed a little bit of school, But if she brought a computer she would not have to fall behind. Generic_Name had to miss school but she had a computer with her so there would be no problem if she could do her work online. This might seem silly to some schools but it would be very helpful to students. Generic_Name had to leave Virginia because her grandmother was diagnosed with cancer and her family wanted to spend time with her in her final months if there was a computer there Generic_Name wouldnt have to miss any class work. Some scenarios of students not being in school are much more serious and the make-up work could be solved while they're away. If there was online school Generic_Name would have one less thing to worry about when she returned. In conclusion online school could help students with catching up on missed class for any reason. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6f57f6c9cde1,8BD74B7B3DE2,"In conclusion if students could attend school online it would solve problems such as, Not living near any schools or any decent schools, students falling ill and being un-able to attend school regularly, And finally If students needed to miss school for family matters. Some might say that having students learn online would encourage them to procrastinate or just skip but not all students are going to just skip school and procrastinate this would actually solve a big problem for many students. In conclusion schools providing online school would solve many more problems than it would create, and it would create new teaching jobs. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b27a0ef527ce,8BE2FA4CDD8F,"Is keeping the Electoral College a good ideal mr/ms senator? Well if you ask me i say no. Why have it? Say the article voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors but who elect the president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a699a9130203,8BE2FA4CDD8F,Because of the winer takes all system in each state it's unfair to the voters and it's unfair to me so changing the election by popular votes for the president of the united states would be best. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b583a1cadc0f,8BE2FA4CDD8F,"Well the electoral college is know for being the ""Disaster Factor"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+313324b2e006,8BE2FA4CDD8F,"Sad cause not only they have a bad name for there self the Americans are also most worried about the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. Because of the focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states candidates hardly or mostly dont have time to put up any campaign ads. The stress of worring about the electoral college can be tuff, they dont even have to put any signs or ads. Crazy cause it's just this one process thats only counting of the electrol votes for congress ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1b13f31a82d,8BE2FA4CDD8F,"the Electroal College consists of 538 electorals. Say the article only 270 eletroals are required to elect the president. In the article the system allows for much worse, but wrose as the election crisis in a century? Well i think so! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac84fc4dc870,8BE2FA4CDD8F,Electors have refused to vote for their party's candidate and cased a deciding vote for whomever they please ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f01162c19ec2,8BE2FA4CDD8F,"It's all happening, everything i said in the begining...about the trouble. Why the senate gets to choose the vice president? why cant the qualified citizens choose for there selfs. That whole area needs some enjustments before they start chooseing for people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c923784eaf09,8C10A8ABF46D,The Driverless people can cause problems. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+335c63016366,8C10A8ABF46D,"Many People dies in car accident. People have to follow rules, so they can survive. If the cars is on over speed, then it can cause big accident and lot of people can died. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+85d2c40910b6,8C10A8ABF46D,"The Driverless people can cause, accident like in traffic jam, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4618a515295f,8C10A8ABF46D,"death , like car is on over speed ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2dd9bb9f5f19,8C10A8ABF46D,"safety is important like drive in speed limit, and follow rules. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+617cbc06d338,8C10A8ABF46D,"People don't wear the seat belts if they don't, then it can cause big problem , people have to wear seat belts. Another thing is Deaths, some people's dont the rules, sometime they drink and drive, if they sleep while driving it can hit somebody. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b054219eef79,8C10A8ABF46D,"The Bridges, if the bridges are week, then it will break, so don;t drive on the week bridges. Another thing is that people like to drive fast and they just drive in the red light. One more thing is traffic jam, in traffic jam people like to hurry, so they hit on another cars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab0d13f4a067,8C10A8ABF46D,"People can safe their life by drive slowly or drive in the speed limit. People neet to follow rules like wear seat belt and don't drink and drive, and it help him and others. Another thing is don't break singnels, if they did, then the police will catch you and give you ticket for breaking rules, so always follow rules and it will cause less deaths and accidents. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+518f449fcce8,8C10A8ABF46D,"So, the people always have to follow rules, so it dosen't hurt other peoples and you. While you driving don't you phone or other thing, if you do you can lose your constrate from road. The Driverless people can cause, accident like in traffic jam, death , like car is on over speed, and safety is important like drive in speed limit, and follow rules. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8f05fc021a37,8C5FF7AD4E99,I think every student should be required to perform community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ee1762a69879,8C5FF7AD4E99,The reason why students should be required to perform community service is that it helps out the environment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+98914a7063cf,8C5FF7AD4E99,Some of the students might like helping out the environment. I know it would be fun to help out the environment. It would be fun because students will get out of class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2fe31510caa,8C5FF7AD4E99,There are many ways to perform community service. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d7a38f6b7e95,8C5FF7AD4E99,"The first way the students can help out the environment is picking up trash, recycle cans, papers, and plastic. The second way to perform community service is that you can tutor kids for 2 hours a week. The third way you can perform community service is that you can do a job. The fourth way is to help make some stuff for the school. Those are my ways to you can do to help out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5909b6ba37ff,8C5FF7AD4E99,Those are my ways to perform community service. I don't think it should be hard community service. If it was hard community service the students couldn't not get the work done. That is why I think students should be required to perform community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cd338d71f368,8C62721A56E0,"Dear state senator, i write you a letter to argue for you as the state senator to keep the election just as it is;as ",Position,Adequate,,,
+48366c4b691d,8C62721A56E0,"To begin, you as the state senator have to keep the ""
+
+Electoral College""
+
+(""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."")in paragraph tree from the article "" 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+de8d3d43d65b,8C62721A56E0,"""by the Office of the Federal Register it says ""the Electoral college consists of five hundred thirty eight electors. A majority of two hundred seventy electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your senators. . . ."" it is easier for us to select the electors and the electors pick the President. in paragraph five from the article ""
+
+Does the Electoral College Work?
+
+""it clearly explains that they all have their own group so therefore they know whats going on and what they all offer.""Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected on what their responsabilities are . . ."". 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8af4e4420f7f,8C62721A56E0,"In addition,i am not saying that the
+
+Electoral College is right in everything because
+
+Electoral College has its difficulties too,just like choosing the popular vote for the President. for example ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a939e3f60895,8C62721A56E0,". . . their difficulties are that ""Under the Electoral college system,voters vote not for the President,but for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. If you lived in texas,for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of thirty four Democratic electors pledge to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and Kerry would get thirty four electoral votes. Who are the Electors? They can be anyone not holding public ofice."" so that is pretty bad but yet choosing you own President would'nt be okey neither because it would be harder and no one can give Presidents the ideas and the presidents would have to come up with the ideas alone. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bd8c6156ce10,8C62721A56E0,"in conclusion, you as the State Senator have to leave the ""Electoral College"" and not change it to ""selection  by popular vote for the president of the united states"".    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d5bce1c832c3,8D0E03A58CC9,"Online classes have been becoming a popular thing, and I see some reasons why they are. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9d1e95853e39,8D0E03A58CC9,"Online classes are cheaper, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e71f42af7f2,8D0E03A58CC9,"can be flexible, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a5d9e0f54c6,8D0E03A58CC9,"can make a student gain confidence, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b18dc7192ac4,8D0E03A58CC9,allow for multitasking. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b4b055dc906,8D0E03A58CC9,"I personally agree with those who say online classes benefit students, and with good reason to support my decision. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2a3b157edcc4,8D0E03A58CC9,"Though some places dont support online classes, there always other places to try out at that may offer similar classes to those you want to attend online, and they might have better benefits than those at a different school. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+283bd32c70cf,8D0E03A58CC9,"To begin this all off, money is a crucial thing in life no matter who you are. The people that are most affected by money problems are students, and this is due to class and material costs. Online classes are about 35-50 percent cheaper in some places. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68bb9f17eaaf,8D0E03A58CC9,"If you ever plan on attending a online class, always check the price compared to going to the campus or school in person. This can help you think about which classes to take and at which place. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a248db88e6af,8D0E03A58CC9,"Online classes can also cut down on the cost of materials needed for the class you wanna take online. Though they may seem not worth it, a online class can cut the cost of a class by a lot, and this in turn helps the student pay for required materials he may need for the class to attend it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d865336456b,8D0E03A58CC9,"This is great for those who have to bend their schedule a some to fit in some class time during the week. Not only that, but online classes have even been shown to allow students to get jobs and make some money while they are attending these classes for things they need to advance in life. Online classes can even be scheduled nowadays, but that feature is only at some schools. This flexibility may come in handy for when you need to get a check up, or even if you have a serious medical issue and need to find out what it is. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d7fd8f78a18,8D0E03A58CC9,"As a note though, always check to see if the class is very flexible, and this is due to being able to have time to make up for what you miss. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+64d6bb73fb1e,8D0E03A58CC9,"And as I have seen, many complain that classes are not flexible by much if not at all. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+39a6b85dbd8d,8D0E03A58CC9,"This is due to the fact of who teaches the class, what class it is, and the school itself. Always make sure you double check the teacher, the class, and the school itself to see if it is flexible enough for you to attend it without feeling too confined or inflexible. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aa76d5986a54,8D0E03A58CC9,Scientific research shows that this feeling can lower a students work effort by almost 100 percent. That is why you must always ask if a class flexible enough for you to take without feeling confined. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b981ce9bd726,8D0E03A58CC9,"Shyness is something students have a lot of. In fact, almost 60 percent of students have some shyness in them if not at all. This shyness can affect if not ruin the class, making new friends, and even doing classwork with other students when needed. Online classes can solve this as they can give a sense of friendliness towards strangers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7117908c9335,8D0E03A58CC9,"Though many complain that they are not shy and need to talk with someone in person, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4213d516819e,8D0E03A58CC9,online classes can help those who tend to be more shy than others are. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a511495e18ef,8D0E03A58CC9,"This allows even moderately shy students the ability to focus on their class, or classes, and not worry about having to be shy towards teachers and fellow students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4716660039c6,8D0E03A58CC9,"Multitasking is a crucial thing in life for you will need to do it most of your life anyway. From running errands to visiting your doctor on the same day, online classes are able to allow time for multitasking. In 2009, they found out those who did online classes multitask better than those who were always on campus to take the same class. This is very good since multitasking is a crucial life skill, and online classes can help this at home. when at home online classes can allow a person to do his laundry, clean his house, and even do dishes and still be in class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6940abe53213,8D0E03A58CC9,"Another reason for multitasking is that it can improve your flexibility by at least 25 percent, and that is great for those who need to fit in time for other things in life such as exercise. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4840579c8f6a,8D0E03A58CC9,"As I mentioned, online classes are popular and do benefit students. They do this by helping cut costs and help save them money for things they need most in life, flexibility to make up work and to do things that they need to in life, help a student build or gain confidence, and allow for multitasking. This all helps a student get through a class by improving the class conditions, or by making it more comfortable for them emotionally. Though online classes aren`t in person and some classes are not very flexible, they can help shy students feel less worried. And as I mentioned as well, there are a lot of schools that may offer the same class with better flexibility than the school you want to go for that class.
+
+Overall, online classes can help a student get through a class cheaply, confidently, with flexibility, and with the ability of multitasking.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e47661ec19bc,8D242A52F9B3,"Do you think that the Unmasing face on Mars was created by akiens? Well my friens joe that i work with believes that the face on mars was. Joe and I are sciemtist for NASA, and we are here to discus the Unmasking face on Mars. So my friend Joe believes that the face on Mars was created by aliens. So here are some reasons why he believes hat he does on this theory. Joe said that ""Scientist figured it was jst another Martin Messa, comnmon enough aroung Cydnoia, only this one had unusual shadow that made it look like an Egyption Pjaraoh. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+494208c19011,8D242A52F9B3,"
+Joe and I have different belifes, although I agree with him on this one. Only because, there are already Martin Messas around Cyndonia. But there aren't any like this thats has ever been seen before. I also think that all theses UNmasking face on mars are created by aliens or martins only because, the name Martin Messa. The Martin must come from the word Martian so they must have some typr on relation going on. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2eb58d4f5182,8D242A52F9B3,Also at the same time i do not believe Joe becuase we have no proof or eveidence that this was really created by alines. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70cad9ee6fd7,8D242A52F9B3,"Only beaucse we have no proof that aliens exsist either. I quit frankly think that this all rubish, but tbis is also my opianion i could be wrong. No one has proof of anything that has happened on mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+730840c23642,8D242A52F9B3,"But then at the same time i still do agree with Joe, but at the same time i do not beileve with Joe. I know you are wondering why i am saything i agree then turn arounf and say i don't . ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d78995252459,8D242A52F9B3,"Well once again here is why i do agree and don't agree. i agree becuase it make scence that out of nowhere there is an unkown figure of a face on mars, but at the same time we do not know who did it. So we jump top conclusions that it ahd to be an ailen . But we have nop prrof that an alien is rwal and we have no proof that any of thid is real. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c44cd0e31507,8D242A52F9B3,"But these are just my opinion on hoe i feel aboiut this so i could be wrong i could be right, but unti we find out we have to continue to make obsevations on this until we find out the truth. So yeah that is how i feel on ths situation.        ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+eda3626ad895,8D2688E8706E,"It probaly seems like a terrific idea of a car that can drive it self i mean who wouldnt want a car that can drive it self when you can just relax in the driver seat? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ce0812e3e5b9,8D2688E8706E,"
+All though it seems like a great idea for a car to drive it self there are some down falls with the idea it seems perfect but perfect can go all wrong. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+461b5229b591,8D2688E8706E,The idea of a car that can have a autopilot or can drive it self isnt a bad idea ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2641137b7284,8D2688E8706E,because lets say your driving to another state an you dont want to drive for number of hours all you have to do is just switch to autopilot an have the car drive it self seems like a good idea doesnt it? Though it seems like a great idea from google...Did google ever stop an think about the saftey of others? Did google stop an think about safety period? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9ca2d726e57,8D2688E8706E,I feel that the smart car idea an development is a bad idea an kind of a waste of time because all that work of selling cars an making cars is going down the drain ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ede9b15bbb21,8D2688E8706E,I say that because almost 90% of the world population have dreamed about driving a car an getting a car. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+967164171e7b,8D2688E8706E,I dont know about you guys but the story said that the smart car is going to have a camera in the car while its driving it self to watch the driver to see if he or she is prepared to take the wheel at any moment ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b8f833b16df,8D2688E8706E,When I think about that statement I think to myself if theres gonna be a camera in the car watching me to see if im prepared or not shouldnt I just drive the car myself 24/7 365? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5109cd589be8,8D2688E8706E,The whole smart car idea yes its a great idea but what about getting your permit an you licsense? Im sure on a driving test we wouldnt be able to use our autopilot to park the car. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45f35ad1e039,8D2688E8706E,The idea of the car driving it self its actually taking the fun out of learning how to drive learning how to park an other things. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fef99b553b44,8D2688E8706E,The smart car is a great idea by google but personally I feel that they should just keep that idea to themself ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+70e4a8c83f88,8D2688E8706E,"because anybody can get in a smart car not knowing how to drive an just turn on the autopilot then when its time for the driver to actuallly try an drive it might end up in a conflict with another pedestrian. Sources say it self that an alert or deffensive driver is the best driver because the driver is aware of traffic. Did google stop an ask if the computers were aware? Probaly not they think that the car is so perfect they probaly didnt stop an think safety.
+
+Google came up with the idea that when the driver should be prepared to take over the car flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays will appear thats a bad idea I say that because what if the lights appear on the dashboard an the driver begans to take over an soon as the lights go away the driver hits another car or a pedestrian?
+
+Dr. Werner Huber said ""why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?"" Wouldnt drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+177450a3c44e,8D2688E8706E,"The story also said ""Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef82d97ece6e,8D2688E8706E,"""If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer? Thats a good question an I say that because what if the car does get in a accident who can the other person blame? The driver or the car it self? Im sure that the other person is going to blame the driver because the driver should of been paying attention despite if the car was in autopilot or not. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c083fa2fbac6,8D2688E8706E,Another point of mine is what if the sensors of the car go out an you have no idea that the car autopilot doesnt work? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+54fdb43ea43e,8D2688E8706E,Lets say that the smart car is the number one car in the world that is getting sold so is everyone going to have one? What if other people feel the same way as I do? That the idea of the smart car is a great idea but I want to stick with driving on my own. Is the world going to stop sellingg cars that drivers can malfuction on their own? If so thats a bad idea because not everyone is going to like the idea of the car it takes the fun an the expererince away from driving an learning how to drive. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+362f4668536d,8D2688E8706E,"The smart car might be a great idea for old people because what if they drop something in the car or they might need some type of assistance. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9dd25eb6850f,8D2688E8706E,"
+Ive came to the conclusion that the smart car is a great idea but I dont agree with it because it just takes the fun out of learning how to drive it seems safe but wouldnt you want a driver behind the wheel that is alert? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9ff4add8907c,8D47E7F9968F,I think we should be able to bring cell phones to school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+461971451779,8D47E7F9968F,in case of an emergency one of the students can call 911 ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86b6371a33ab,8D47E7F9968F,Also maybe one of the students need to tell there parents they need to stay after school and they cant because they took cell-phones out of school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70a53c16ba1a,8D47E7F9968F,Even though we students use them during class ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1f93332f4818,8D47E7F9968F,that's why a teacher is there for stopping them from using it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3c6f0fce8992,8D47E7F9968F,I feel like we should be able to bring them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bec0dd137b0,8D47E7F9968F,they are a little part of our life it builds our social life and connects us with friends. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34dcd343b2e4,8D47E7F9968F,if were walking home and its after school and we get hurt ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+757b7c00404c,8D47E7F9968F,how are we going to get help without our cell-phones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e6fd890bea7,8D47E7F9968F,But i agree we should be able to bring our cell-phones and be able to use it during our free time because were not bothering no one or harming them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bed417d6c65d,8D47E7F9968F,I believe that we should only get in trouble when using our cell-phones is when we are using it during class. But besides that we shouldn't be getting in trouble just by using it during lunch. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d9f7e7b41977,8D5DC914F9F3,Driverless cars should not be used on open roads ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2f4ed00bb7fe,8D5DC914F9F3,due to the extreamly dangerous potental the driverless car has. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c481f4cfea38,8D5DC914F9F3,If you were to get in a car accident who would be to blame ? The car or the driver ? ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5dcf117eb6f3,8D5DC914F9F3,"The computer of the car could have so many errors that could potentally injure another human on the roads. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+3ced64892fa6,8D5DC914F9F3,"The dangerous potental the car has is, it can accelerate on its own. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+57547b45c570,8D5DC914F9F3,"Imagine you're going down 267 here in Plainfield. You're in a driverless car and the car begins to accelerate, however it doesnt meet a constant speed. As the car continues to go faster and faster, its to late to stop because you already rearended the car infront of you. Causing the person in the car infront of you to spin out of controll and hit a telephone pole. Because of a computer error in the car an inicent bystander's life has been taken. That there just shows the potental danger the driverless car has just due to the ""auto acceleration"" programing in the car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae6250ca40e8,8D5DC914F9F3,In that car crash you have to give the poliece your insurance redgerstration ext. When you file the insurance claim whos fault it the accident? Yourself or the car manufacturers? ,Claim,Effective,,,
+716c3c203cb5,8D5DC914F9F3,"You could try to blame the manufacture however you're probably not going to get to far. It's not their fault the computer of the car had a glitch. There is nothing they can do about it. So now you could potentally be charged with wreckless driving and vehicular manslotter, even though you didn't intentually kill the person. Your insurance is most likely going to say it was your fault for not having controll of the car. Who is to say it was infact the car and not your fault? That's just the problem exactaly . ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6768e4c12fb6,8D5DC914F9F3,Technology fails everyday so why put it in a car and put human lives at risk? ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5e8213f00f0b,8D5DC914F9F3,Using the heads-up system is a good idea ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+85f8914a0b6e,8D5DC914F9F3,however it could also fail resulting in the faitality of another human ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+67f44c939bd7,8D5DC914F9F3,Using the heads-up system could get the attention of the driver to let them know that they need to take over. What happens when the driver doesnt take over and the car continues to have a mind of it's own. Again possiable resulting in an accident and a possiable faitality. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ec804029184,8D5DC914F9F3,"
+Admitting that technology is a great advantage and is used everywhere today. The point is greater technology than what we have now should stay off the roads. Keeping technology off the roads can save lives and prevent accidents waiting to happen. The danger of auto accelaration, heads-up system, and not knowing whos fault the accident was your's or the car's, is absalutely not worth the life of a human.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+502efb746920,8D69369DEDA2,"The electoral college is a very important process in congress. It gives citizens that are in the college a chance to meet the people that will be running for a very powerful position. Sometimes voices arent heard and of these 528 people, some will be humble. its also a good thing that they use a majority ruling system, which can make things easier instead of detailing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3c9f05c1f7a6,8D69369DEDA2,"If the voting for election of president was changed to popularity vote only, then it wouldnt be quite as fair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+53dc25b18897,8D69369DEDA2,"Obviously the president who has apppeared more times on television or at meetings will win. This method screams unfairness. Whichever candidate has more money and funding will obviously become more popular, even if their intentions as president arent as good as the qualities the other candidate's are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+96c80dbc21fd,8D69369DEDA2,"Although both methods by themselves seem a little unfair to work on, i say it would be better to work with both. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34e7c1358428,8D69369DEDA2,"If you leave it to the electoral college, then only those people will be able to have a say in who we want as president for the united states of america. However if we leave it to just popularity, whoever has more money will get the votes and win. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c34d48530b4,8D69369DEDA2,"Some people say that the voice of the people in America is the most important and it really is. What is the point of being in charge of a country where no one is happy and everyone wants to get rid of you? By this standing pount, many people say its critical to use populartiy vote but as i stated before, whoever has more funding will win. But its also unfair to those who have less access to media. Whichever president they hear more about is the one they will unconsiously choose. Or some will rely on the trusting of their party ie. democratic or republican. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0be17c0571a9,8D69369DEDA2,"Both methods are extremely unfair by themselves, so we should not sigle out a voting process. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3ca75de9a687,8D69369DEDA2,"The way we have it now works perfectly well and should not be changed in my opinion. Taking the overall amount for all the different categories seems like the perfect solution. This way you get an opinion from those in congress, those in the senate, those in the Electoral College and most importantly the voices of the people.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+84966cfe139b,8D7CBF2251F1,"The electoral college  has been used for many years. Most people think that it is a place and not a process , well it is a process. the electoral college is the selection of electors. for the process they need 538 electors, for 270 electoral votes. Each canidate has their own group. The presidential election is held every  four years to elect or keep the same president for 4 years. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fd449e13eda4,8D7CBF2251F1,"I think that its the way to vote ,and its worked for so many years why fix it if its hasnt had a problem yet. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2367fdd99be5,8D7CBF2251F1,The electoral college is well known and has always been the way to pick our president. its a non-democratic method of selectiing the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30ba0e5d3984,8D7CBF2251F1,the other side who are for popular vote think that the electoral college is unfair and that there is not a certainty of a fair outcome. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+532e39b36383,8D7CBF2251F1,"i say that if the outcome isnt fair then how are u supposse to win as a president. Having more votes as a canidate is not fair but thats how you win by having more votes.
+
+My opinion on that is why would losing be fair thats the point one canidate wins and one loses. of couse the other person who lost would have anger and therefore be upset and say that the electoral is an unfair jugdement. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+44dd0e373baa,8D7CBF2251F1,The candiate wins because of the majority vote in their designated states. if the other canidate dosent have as many states he could only win by the collected vote within the states that he/she has. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b58483525dee,8D7CBF2251F1,popular vote would be awful and much harder to do as a process ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0162af48f9c7,8D7CBF2251F1,"that would mean that every one in the United States would vote who they want and it be sent to the capital to see whos victorious. Popular vote has no process or stragey or base plan to vote , and what if states dont like this idea so they revolt against the goverment. states might get together with there senate and riot in order to stop this. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6773a5e6fbdf,8D7CBF2251F1,"In my opinion popular vote is messy, controversial and just down right uncalled for there is a plan within the electoral college and i think that they should keep was has been working. yes we are evolving as a whole but somethings are left to be the same and not tamperd with ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0810bb83064c,8D9D207D883C,I think we should banish the Electoral College becuse we the people decide who the president is not  Electorals. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2070ea624ce2,8D9D207D883C,We should just go back to basics and have a normal vote system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20a64d6a85b6,8D9D207D883C,"This system is no working for our needs so we need a better and direct voting system. One big example for leting go of the Electoral college is the disater factor and it just unfair to voters. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c3be2685a07,8D9D207D883C,The electoral college should be cancelled because there are too many things wrong with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c2f01aba89e,8D9D207D883C,"Like one is the winnner-take-all sytyem, by a couple of votes off and one canidate takes all the points in that state. So with that, canidates will use mostly of he's/her's attention on big states to get all the big points there. And little states see little to no campaign ads for any candidates because of the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ebce72983e0e,8D9D207D883C,Then swing states help us in the electoral college with dividing the points to the cadidates. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e233fdf0df3d,8D9D207D883C,"Help with the winner-take-all system, it just the oppisite of it. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2e9a44e81e4b,8D9D207D883C,"Also the electors rarely betrayed the voting. Then the are times where the candidate wins the elctoral vote, then loses the national popular vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da80d1f2101f,8D9D207D883C,"With all of this infomation the Electoral College should be descarded because it is a non-democratic method and it just an anachronism. And when you are voting, you are voting for electors, not the priesident. And which candidate wins the popular vote wins the election. its just unfair to the voters because they dont really vote for the priesident.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4a75f388bc73,8DA3804EEB25,I am for the development of these cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+74bfceae69e3,8DA3804EEB25,It sounds interesting to me ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+232efd7bb5b3,8DA3804EEB25,It can help those drivers who is unable to drive because of some kind disabilt in their body. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fca2c18f308,8DA3804EEB25,"It keeps a driver from falling a sleep behind the wheel and hurting someone because if the car is driverless, you can fall a sleep with out hurting anyone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca17ddaeb973,8DA3804EEB25,The passage says the cars can steer themselves. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bab55b84550f,8DA3804EEB25,The passage says that the public trainsport system will some day be driverless ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c0c819e5ffb,8DA3804EEB25,"The cars so far still need a driver for some of the things. The car can do the steering. That sounds easier than it is. It is realiy hard, it just take some time. Driverless cars are possible. The cars so far still need a driver for some of the things. The car can do the breaking. That is sounds easier than it is. It is realiy hard. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f660f0845359,8DA3804EEB25,"I am for the development of these cars. It sounds interesting to me. It can help those drivers who is unable to drive because of some kind disabilt in their body. It keeps a driver from falling a sleep behind the wheel and hurting someone because if the car is driverless, you can fall a sleep with out hurting anyone. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6abc6feb6124,8DE7DB4D3F8A,"Many uncommon things happen causing people to be very fascinated with a certain subject. Any time something to do with space occurs, many people freak out or become fascinated with the subject. When something to do with space does occur, then usually people believe alien life forms. But with a cleaner and better camera the photos revealed ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2137c7be884c,8DE7DB4D3F8A,it was a natural landform and not an alien monument after all ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0bfd801eb666,8DE7DB4D3F8A,"With an even better camera lense than before the picture is still proof that shows it is a normal, typical landform ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+08dd027e4072,8DE7DB4D3F8A,"Even with small objects you would still be able to clearly see if the object is a landform or a alien life form. The natural landform is equivalent to a butte or mesa. The ""face"" on Mars is still a like to a normal landform on Earth. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84463ab4a1bb,8DE7DB4D3F8A,The form can not be life like or be alien like due to the amount of information and facts that NASA has to back up its ideas. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2a03752f6446,8DE7DB4D3F8A,The conspiracy theorists don't have as many facts as NASA to back up their information and ideas. NASA has majority of the information and facts which over rules the conspiracy theorists information and facts. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e97551a4af0d,8DFCC03C34D8,"When considering whether or not to allow children to participate in sports or other activities without an average above a C, what one must remember is that everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses. Yes, many people excel in academics, but there are others, who math and science just don't click with them. By saying these more athletically inclined individuals cannot participate in their medium, you take away one of their great pleasures. Some kids get a rush when they find out they aced their midterm, but others take greater pleasure in scoring the winning touchdown or participating in a club where you help others. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+da0c6cbca60b,8DFCC03C34D8,"Without something for the non-academic children to shine at, their confidence may be slashed leaving devastating consequences throughout the rest of their lives. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d525da0eb49a,8DFCC03C34D8,"There are many speculations and theories as to why some kids can't perform as well as others in school, and so they turn to sports or other clubs. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b779816a47ca,8DFCC03C34D8,"Many of these theories include that they just have too much energy and can't stay focused, or these children have bad time management and so they don't do their homework or complete their assignments. Clubs and sports can allow the underachievers to get out some of their excess energy, so they can stay on task and perform better. When they are practicing four days a week with games on the weekend, kids don't have times to dilly-dally, so they learn time management and perform better in class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9ec983921a4c,8DFCC03C34D8,"By taking away clubs and activities unless they have a certain grade, one may be removing the one and only aspect of school that certain individuals enjoy. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ed6acaaaf702,8DFCC03C34D8,"By causing them to hate school more, one is discouraging a better performance. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+54695a50ac15,8DFCC03C34D8,"Some say that sports cause kids to not focus on school as much and that by forcing them to have higher grades before they can join you get immediate results, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ff2a54dbfe6c,8DFCC03C34D8,but sometimes it just makes students angrier. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+53ea7c219d9f,8DFCC03C34D8,"To get the best results, better grades should be encouraged through sports. Instead of just saying no if a student has a certain grade, help could be offered. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a576e48df972,8DFCC03C34D8,School sports and clubs should be allowed no matter what the students grade is. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b9a7964d0efd,8DFCC03C34D8,"This is very beneficial to a student's health, confidence, and can even improve their schoolwork. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+75732c16d300,8E6CB58E9762,In my oppion they should use the Electoral college to desied who wins the Election. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9e7fd5a312d3,8E6CB58E9762,"They should always use the Electoral college because it wouldn't be fair if they went by the population of a state, just the simple fact that some states are more populated than other. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d56d8f8458fa,8E6CB58E9762,"For instance states like New York, Florida, and California are more populated than, states like Hawaii, Rhold Island, and delaware. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a2c03b143cdf,8E6CB58E9762,in my opinion the electoral colleged not only right but fare. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc44ab60a9d2,8E6CB58E9762,Its equal rights and justice. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+efa17536d011,8E6CB58E9762,"The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisism in the century; the system allows for us much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of people. Back in1960.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7099ab15bd2d,8E938A38BA43,Why do we need a Electoral College ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+faa37f006ff2,8E938A38BA43,Whats wrong with it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3e4e61dfd57d,8E938A38BA43,5 reasons why we choose a president ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+86e713409c95,8E938A38BA43,We have to find out whats going on with this Electoral College. If we don't something might happen. We will find the truth about the Electoral College. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+802630e3bf2f,8E938A38BA43,Whats wrong with Electoral College? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c58716c35fb3,8E938A38BA43,"Voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ,
+
+according to paragraph 10 . Again they said if you live intexas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. All the votes that people vote for really aren't voting, there just voting for the slate electors. The electors choose which one they will vote for, but is that any fair, for the people, they make a choice to vote, there not being forced to vote by command. People like to vote because they want a new leader or, for instance, somebody like President Barack Obama. He is going into his 6 year as president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5439c8e65397,8E938A38BA43,Why do we need a Electoral College? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+23b3784c373b,8E938A38BA43,"The Electoral College consists of 539 electors, according to paragraph 3.
+
+A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The Founding Fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and the lection of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+69c0495989a0,8E938A38BA43,What are the reasons why we choose a president? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4f8486620692,8E938A38BA43,"
+The reasons why we choose a president is because of the swing states, and the big states. Swing states is a winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates as we saw in [2012's] election to focus their campaign efforts on tht toss-up states. Next is the Big States, the electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virture of the mal-apportionmentof the senate. The Big States are like : Texas, Californina, and Florida. But this doesn't annoy me because people still have a chance to vote whether or not, the votes don't to the congress. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+14e41e382c22,8E938A38BA43,"In Conclusion, Electoral College is a well-known thing when to choose a president or vice president or even governer ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8ee976a76a4e,8E938A38BA43,"Elecotral College is important, you can say that because maybe you agree to it but i still don't ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+c5582befc54b,8E938A38BA43,"because the votes aren't really going to the votes to the congress, the votes really go to the slate of governers or the senate but the the senate or congress are really the real people that can choose the president or vice president.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f356a968dfea,8EEB5226121C,"The electoral college system is archane, confusing and disruptive to the constitutional democratic republic that is the United States of America. Voters are thrown off by this system and are often completely over-looked in an election. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b9a6c55ec645,8EEB5226121C,"For a country that was built on the ideals of freedom and fair representation, using the electoral college system isn't right. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+594e9d9aca67,8EEB5226121C,"Firstly, canidates running for president need a majority of 270 the 538 electors to win an election. Thus, they focus more on winning swing states such as Ohio, rather than winning the approval of their constituents. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a578d0a43fa4,8EEB5226121C,"This immediatly shows faults of the electoral college. What kind of government is running the world's super-power? One that ignores its people and bombs governments of other countries for doing the same thing? The electoral college takes away from the value of the vote- a right for which the United States of America was founded. The electoral college may have had good and just intentions, but isn't effective or fair now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+509d127d96e0,8EEB5226121C,"Also, with the embarrassingly low voter turnout the USA has already, having a confusing, old-fashioned and unfair system of electing leaders will only decrease the amount of citizens that actually go to the polls. Studies like the one published September 1st, 2012 by the American Research Institute, have shown that the average American person doesn't know very much about their country and how it works. Those that do are a minority. So, why would the government that is supposed to be looking out for, protecting and listening to its citizens still use a system that only deters already ignorant people from participating in elections? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6d0010b960aa,8EEB5226121C,"Secondly, the electoral college (in addition to putting down the voter) has been proven to be faulty. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8c8d8cd9d74b,8EEB5226121C,"Like the 2000 election with George W. Bush, with Clinton in 1992 and Nixon in 1968- these men all had less of the popular vote, but were president. How? How did they become the Leader of the Free World- the Free World that gives everyone the right to vote for their representitives- without the popular vote? Without the blessing of their constituents? How were these men sworn in without the backing of true democracy? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c2e5c749925,8EEB5226121C,"The electoral college.
+
+This system goes against every democratic ideal in the United States' foundation ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a6b4a293428,8EEB5226121C,"And yet, it is still how president after preseident is put into the Oval Office- sometimes wrongly as explained above. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5ff0977250a3,8EEB5226121C,"The electoral college is wrong. It just is. There are no valid arguements for it. It puts down the voter and, in a sense, makes them obsolete which, in addition to being extremely hypocritical, is just not right 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7804c411af8,8EF9BE158AD3,student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+da6d3df8ae8b,8EF9BE158AD3,its give you education when you not able to go school to get education ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bcd3151bf280,8EF9BE158AD3,"like handcart people who can't go school for study but they want to study,its give you education when you stay in home. people don't want to go school they can do distance learning. practically education which help to get success in our life. online and video conferencing help your education strong. you can ask any thing ,you can search anything which help to solve your problem ,which help to get you some knowledge. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5baf9f39ae74,8EF9BE158AD3,student doesn't like to school because student are lazy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63030bab3617,8EF9BE158AD3,But if student are lazy and they dont want to go school for study distance learning help you to complete your education. now it is a 2018 lots techknowleg are made day by day which help you to get knowledge from different sources. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cddb643a325d,8EF9BE158AD3,distance learning help to save your pocket money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c32ea830215,8EF9BE158AD3,",if you go school to get a education you need a few money for lunch. Those student who have a car to go school ,they can save their gas money which help to save your money. those student who like to stay home and study distance learning help you. distance learning help you every single second of your life. if you go or move anywhere and there is no any school for study it help you to get knowledge about every thing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b974ea1e47cc,8EF9BE158AD3,YouTube and googal is the one of popular online and video conferencing in this generation because every body need YouTube for learning ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+557202b6492c,8EF9BE158AD3,A person who worked in hotel and he forgot the step how to make lamb meat. he was waiting 10 minute for his friend to get some clues but his friend didn't came to help him. he take out his cellphone and search in YouTube and googal. he found a lots of idea and clues to make lamb meat. those people who already graduated they also need a online educated because study and education was never ending. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea62f0c6b3ab,8EF9BE158AD3,some student are really talented from their childhood because they already entering the distance learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd1847359a56,8EF9BE158AD3,"this 2018 kids are really powerful mind. a kid who just 5 years old he already how you to used mobile,how to used computer,this types of education also know a distance learning but not given by school. school give a distance learning education not only for graduation, its give you education for whole life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75263ed0b48d,8EF9BE158AD3,"some people are blind,handicap etc Those people have really problem to walking , who can;t walk this distance learning help you every single movement of your life. these all are the benefit of distance learning which is provided from school. i am positive for distance learning education because it its best way of study theroritacaly and practically. sometimes doesn't have answer when you need but distance learning have a different types of answer form. distance learning t is not only for handicap people it is good and beneifitablefor everyone small kid to youngest people all over the world. so i am positive with distance learning. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f9c41c98a591,8F1AF7F5E129,"WHAT IS THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE?
+
+DOES THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE WORK? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4e1c3352b964,8F1AF7F5E129,''THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS A PROCESS NOT A PLACE THE FOUNDING FATHERS ESTABLISHED IT IN THE CONSTITUTION AS A COMPRIMISE BETWEEN ELECTION OF THE PRESIDENT BY VOTE IN CONGRESS AND ELECTIION OF THE PRESIDENT  BY A POPULAR  VOTE OF QUALIFIED CITIZENS''.THIS PROCESS CONSISTS OF 538 ELECTORS. ALSO EACH CANDIDATE RUNNING FOR PRESIDENT IN YOUR STATEHAS HIS OR HER OWN GROUP OF ELECTORS. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+10ab562eeb72,8F1AF7F5E129,"""WHAT HAVE RICHARD NIXON, JIMMY CARTER, BOB DOLE, AND THE US CHAMBER OF COMMERCE, AND THEIR AFL-CIO ALL, IN THEIR TIME, AGREE ON""?  THE CORRECT ANSWER IS ABOLISHING THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a5b7e75867a,8F1AF7F5E129,PEOPLE AY THEIR ARE THINGS WRONG WITH THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE. THAT IS TRUE. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a00dd8474c24,8F1AF7F5E129,"ONE OF THE TINGS THAT IS WRONG WITH IT IS ""UNDER THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE SYSTEM , VOTERS VOT NOT FOR PRESIDENT, BUT FOR A SLATE OF ELECTOERS, WHO IT Turn elect the president. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+641b6d08c782,8F1AF7F5E129,these Are what the electoral colleges is and the goods and bads.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+19e3b3e30547,8F47C4F378EA,I am a high school student and in my point of view what i infer about reading the passage is that election by popular votes needs to happen ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e9960647d7d0,8F47C4F378EA,"There are several reasons, well first i dont know what this people are doing maybe they are being paid to choose the president it dosen't mean enything that they got more ethoes than the rest of the state ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+283949991d25,8F47C4F378EA,"People should choose who they really want to be the president, they should give prove of when they count the votes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bcf4b0b10333,8F47C4F378EA,"The countrie is the home of alot of people imigrants and native we all should have the same rigths and that rigth is to vote for the person that will lead the countrie to a better place, not some slate of the state. Maybe they got more ethoes than the rest of the countrie but each person is smart to know what is good and what is wrong. In the passage they tell the reader, under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9c46afc4e08,8F47C4F378EA,Then what is the point of voting maybe this people are not even considering the people who vote they are only doing what they think is rigth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d931f474d4a,8F47C4F378EA,"This people have alot of money but they still want more and more, inportant people would brive this elector with alot of money, and they would be doing whatever they are ask for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+72218d9086c7,8F47C4F378EA,They could be 200 votes of the entire state that if the state only as 20 electors thoes are the votes that are counting in real life. What future could we have trusting this electors our chances are really low we cant let this happen ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efee2b99b220,8F47C4F378EA,After reading all my letter you will understeand why did I talke like this about the elector and why  the electoral college have to be remove. The word of the entire countrie should coun't more than the wor of 200 people. Thoes 200 could be in who knows what to trust our future. this is why I think that electoral college is not an opssion.              ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85bf7e9b389a,8F6F0CD4986A,"Driverless cars could be the future of our generation. Many car companies have taken this idea and are trying to pursue it. They are cars that, eventually, will drive by themselves. It seems like a very creative and speechless innovation. However, there are many questionable aspects of the car that need to be taken into account. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3e355265073e,8F6F0CD4986A,I do not think driverless cars are a good idea for the safety of our generations. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+882cf1e93584,8F6F0CD4986A,"Drivers today have to go through intensive studying and classes just to gain a license. They think of it as the first step into adulthood and freedom. If driverless cars do take over our population, that will disapear. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d4992f01edd,8F6F0CD4986A,"Teens will look past the greatness of being able to drive, and will look for another way to gain the freedom that they are desperatley seeking for. They also will not have anything that they are in complete control of. In the article it says, ""He envisions a future with a public-transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transportation taxi system."" If this happens, teens would not be in conrol of the car, the car would. That leaves kids to rely on yet another thing in their lives. Teens already have to rely on many things everyday. I think that if we add another one, and take away that sense of freedom, we will be taking away a big part of life. This is one reason I do not think driverless cars are a good idea. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb18482a6094,8F6F0CD4986A,Another reason I disagree with them is because of safety ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd04557d85f8,8F6F0CD4986A,"Technology should not be relied on for big tasks like driving. Car companies are being thourough and making sure they are safe, but technology, even today, still seems to occasionally mess up. In the article it says, ""Most drvining laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers."" I agree that the best way to ensure safety is with a driver that is focused and knowledged. These driverless cars could potentially be dangerous to us. If the car messes up even once, or the company makes a mistake in the programming, we could definately be in great danger. Safety is the most important thing, and because we can never be 100% sure that technology won't mess up, we should not have driverless cars in the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3a52167402a,8F6F0CD4986A,The final reason I do not think that we should be excited for driverless cars is because of the law ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f27fb2ff7252,8F6F0CD4986A,". If a regular car gets into an accident, we have laws that say who should be at fault. Also, it can already be complicated to figure out who should take the blame today with regular cars. If we all drove driverles cars, a new stack of laws would have to be made to support them. Getting used to those laws would be hard because we have never lived in the world of driverless cars. In the article it says, ""If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?"" This is a good point. If there is an accident where someone gets injured, not everyone will agree who should take the fall for it. There will be riots and fighting between manufacturers and individuals, and overall, it is not worth it. We should not destroy what we already have for something this risky. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+524a1d358de9,8F6F0CD4986A,"These are the reasons that I do not think driverless cars should be pursued by car companies. I do agree that they would be very cool, but they are in fact, to good to be true. With the many complications that could come up, to the lack of freedom in teens, driverless cars take away more than what they could be bringing. Instead of investing in this innovation, we should use the investments to pursue more practical products, and to continue to make what we already have, better. Driving comes with a great responsibility that technology does not have. That is why I do not think driverless cars are a good idea for the safety of our generations.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+470a310753bd,8F78D1ABFDB6,I don't think u should make the students of our school do community service because that will take away there time if its after school or there learning time if its during school. it would also be to hard to make all of the students of the school to do that the school could use its time to help the school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb38646b8b66,8F78D1ABFDB6,Even though it helps the community out by making it a cleaner and safer place the students should have a choice in what they want to do for their community. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ae8d7291c9e,8F78D1ABFDB6,If we had to do community service during school it would take time away from our learning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab9db33acc32,8F78D1ABFDB6,students need as much time as they can in school to learn what they are doing so they can pass tests and pass the grade. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fce6fd06dc26,8F78D1ABFDB6,"If it was after school it could take time away from the students doing their homework, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd05b83ec822,8F78D1ABFDB6,most of the students have to do their homework after school and help clean their house. If they are in a sport also they wouldn't have enough time to help the community if it was mandatory. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6dfee7bbebff,8F78D1ABFDB6,It would also be to much work to try and monitor all of the students that are at the school to make them do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19ce6c34bcc7,8F78D1ABFDB6,The school could put that time they spent into helping out the school and making the school a better place for the students so they could have a better place to learn. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d609c6c332cb,8F899DE6880E,I can't help but notice the controversy regarding the Electoral College and its role in electing the President of the United States. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c540132ede9a,8F899DE6880E,"While most argue that the Electoral College is a violation of freedom, I strongly believe that the Electoral College premotes equality ",Position,Effective,,,
+6eefe48c802a,8F899DE6880E,for the candidates ,Claim,Effective,,,
+38d61006e0f6,8F899DE6880E,the people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4cbec72d1db3,8F899DE6880E,"For example, The Electoral College system serves as ""checks-and-balances."" In the words of the Office of the Federal Register in ""What Is the Electoral College?"": ""The founding fathers established [The Electoral College] as a compromise between Congress and election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens,"" (Office of the Federal Register 1). This system of voting balances the voice of the people with the voice of Congress. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96431e6424e6,8F899DE6880E,Opposers might say that our votes don't even matter due to the fact that the popular vote doesn't directly determine our nation's President. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7eaeb3d43daf,8F899DE6880E,"This is far from reality, because the popular vote is vital to the Electoral College. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c924c2dbacdc,8F899DE6880E,"The Office of the Federal Register writes that ""most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate,"" (Office of the Federal Register 7). This means that the popular vote does determine - for most states anyway - whether or not the candidate recieves all of the electoral votes for that particular state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cee43231612a,8F899DE6880E,"For example, in ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" Bradford Plumer whines about how, ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters,"" going on to say that, ""Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states,"" (Plumer 13). ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f83209ce0998,8F899DE6880E,"However, Richard A. Posner makes a fair point: ""The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+417d9dba8061,8F899DE6880E,"No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president...[If a candidate with only regional appeal becomes President] the residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised - to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president,"" (Posner 19). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cdd7e097c74,8F899DE6880E,"Moreover, Posner also writes that ""Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign - to really listen to the competing candidates - knowing that they are going to decide the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average...and the most thoughtful votes should be the ones to decide the election,"" (Posner 20). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd71ad825ff0,8F899DE6880E,"Overall, the Electoral College is a symbol of our freedom of speech. I do hope you take my thoughts under consideration. The Electoral College may be called ""outdated."" But as the saying goes, ""If it 'aint broke, don't fix it."" ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+34aac0beca06,8FA202BD4570,We humans have been trying to discover aliens for more than a million years. Why have we not found them yet? We have been up in space multiple times and we have had yet another more multipe times sent space robots that went into orbital. So ask your self this question why have we not found aliens yet? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a1d1e9a26dd3,8FA202BD4570,I think due to evidence that it is a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2742d37625c5,8FA202BD4570,"I think it is a natural landform because in paragraph one it states that ""...when it spotted the shadowly likeness of a human face."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ac496c077d2,8FA202BD4570,"When I read this I then concluded that it only really looked like a human because of the shadows that make up the ""eyes, nose and mouth"" in which makes this rock figure looking as if it has a face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a9efb669005,8FA202BD4570,I do think that is a natural rock landform because God created the earth so that only people would live on earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e934404391a,8FA202BD4570,Also God never created aliens as it states in the begining of Genisis in the bible. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+53e6a9f6a7b1,8FA202BD4570,"Another example of why that the ""face"" on Mars is a natural landform is because it states in the text on paragraph seven that ""There was no alien monument after all."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0aa3195cdb57,8FA202BD4570,This is poroving that even scienctists have conculuded that there was no landform on mars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de988abb342d,8FA202BD4570,"Then on April 8, 2001 the space station found to ""face landform"". Though due to the pixalation i think that it did not look like a face anymore. The scientists should have put each photo in the same pixilation because it would have been an accurate demonstration over the years and how this rock landform has formed. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+64932f9dde6c,8FA202BD4570,Based on the evidence from the article and my past knowleadge I have conculded that this rock landform is in fact a natural landform that aliens have not created/ made this face looking landform. So what do you think? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4f0a7d8394fa,8FE2640ACE99,I think that they should change the election way of how they are doing it. I think that the president should be chosen by the most popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e22984319935,8FE2640ACE99,"that they shouldnt do the voting thing if they are gunna end up chooseing it them selfes. in the passage it said that, the electoral college is made up of 538 electors and only the majority vote is 270. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+26c8e50c8dc6,8FE2640ACE99,i dont understand why they thousand of people to vote if their vote doesnt really mater its what senators choose overall. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b88d466a432d,8FE2640ACE99,"i think it would be fair if what the peple choose the most shall win. What if one of them gets more votes and the senator picks the other because they had more votes in there group, thats not fair. i just think that the overall vote of the people should count, and not make them wast there time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1fb9cac3b14,8FE2640ACE99,"when you vote for you candidate you actuall voting for the candidates elector, so they are trying to trick them into thinking that there votw would count. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+467536b84f58,8FE2640ACE99,"what if the persident that the senator choose didnt know how to work stuff and had bad disitions, the election is every four years on a tuesday on a november. thats a pretty long time if you ask me. I think that half of the people votes dont cont cause of the sentors that choose ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3c00bbcc44f,8FE2640ACE99,i know it would be long to count everones vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+43a71952b226,8FE2640ACE99,but i dont think it matters because in the end it would be chosen by the people that wanted that president not what the senators wanted.    ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2d664e20ff52,9000217714BE,My opinion about this change is a good idea ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+491f101bf1d4,9000217714BE,"But also many students have a grade of a (C)
+
+or lower it would not be a good idea changing the policy sport grade for those students ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9b231d4e0494,9000217714BE,For others this policy my be a good idea because that way students that love sport's can start doing much better in school and have better grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1de07b1c78d8,9000217714BE,"A, (B) or higher is a good grade so that way they can play a sport they like. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+682ebc183f55,9000217714BE,Teachers would probably accept this policy so that way their students will pay more attention. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2715e6261ce,9000217714BE,"This change would not effect much but for students who don't study this idea might not be good, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b134141c49d0,9000217714BE,might fill bad because they love sport's but can't play them for having to not pay attention or do your work at home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ca99d1348d5,9000217714BE,we should vote to see if we like this policy or not so we wont have to pass thru all this stuff of the policy changing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4883e37af467,9000217714BE,A fact about students here in SCHOOL_NAME would choose not to accept this new school policy because the old policy is u can't have more than three (F) and i would say the old policy is better than the new one our principal want to change it to ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e4327e630de,9000217714BE,So if i pick my own decision it would be no changing policy and its good as it is ,Position,Adequate,,,
+558429aece17,9000217714BE,the policy they should really change is having to no wear uniform to school because its such a distraction to me an much others. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+edf369c7d3d1,900A879708F0,"Many school systems now offer an option of attending online classes either in conjunction with a students school year classes or during summer break. Though this opportunity may presumably appear to provide many advantages, there are many typically unacknowledged resulting consequences that lead me to argue that this type of schooling does not compare to hands on learning in the classroom. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1e39f23b583e,900A879708F0,Students would not benefit nearly as much from online classes than in the classroom ,Position,Effective,,,
+cfb8e35f2b80,900A879708F0,it allows easy potential for students to struggle to comprehend material but lack teacher assistance ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2eb3451555cd,900A879708F0,education at home provides far more accessibility to distractions and cheating than in a supervised classroom ,Claim,Effective,,,
+87474a9efd58,900A879708F0,requiring students to spend long hours comprehending difficult material can become increasingly straining and taxing on both the mind and body. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c2b8feb76a78,900A879708F0,"Online courses are not beneficial to students learning as without an educational professional present to guide them, students can easily struggle to comprehend difficult concepts. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+750206856959,900A879708F0,"Generally one may assume the ability for students taking online courses to work at their own pace makes it more valuable than structured and scheduled lessons in the classroom, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5a3def23ed3c,900A879708F0,but this is usually not the case. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0f847014b37b,900A879708F0,"I myself enrolled in an online geometry course during one summer and although there were occasional scheduled conference calls, a majority of the course was done independently and free of assistance. Working at your own pace isn't so appealing once a student has been presented an overwhelming amount of difficult material to learn with no other guidance, requiring many more hours dedicated to struggling to comprehend material than if they had a qualified teacher present. Additionally, these courses usually require a specific amount of learning to be completed each day, so the idea a student can leisurely complete assignments is a huge misconception. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e7e514020a36,900A879708F0,Although I recognize other students experiences taking online courses may have been different than mine ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+29d9eadef95a,900A879708F0,the structure of my class is a good representation of what most of the other online courses in my county would have been like. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6f9bcfcb276b,900A879708F0,Another reason online classes are not as beneficial as they may appear is that students face constant distraction and opportunity to cheat at home than if they were in the classroom. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d59ac81bf0ff,900A879708F0,"It's easy to think there would actually be less distraction in the quiet of your own home than classrooms that can sometimes be full of loud and troublesome students, subsequently making it hard to focus at times. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+93a1004a003a,900A879708F0,"However, schools often implement strict regulations on phones, food, and talking as they know how much these things can be a distraction to a learning environment. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+197e1622e6c9,900A879708F0,"At home with no teacher supervision, students may find themselves easily distracted by electronics and the accessibility to get up and do other things in the comfort of their own house. This results it it taking even longer to get through material and presents the risk of students missing out on important information. Moreover, without teacher supervision it may become tempting for the student to cheat on assignments as it is far more easy to get away with and there would be no one present to enact consequences. I've heard many student discussing taking online courses for the sole purpose that they know they can find answer keys and other materials to cheat online. In my particular situation, only my midterm and final exam were monitored in a public setting, leaving opportunity for other students to cheat on any test, quiz, or other classwork assignment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2370082e63ea,900A879708F0,I agree cheating is inevitable in any educational circumstances ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ce7e8608b3f1,900A879708F0,but it is far more prevalent in unsupervised situations. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6e382db4ab1a,900A879708F0,"Lastly, online courses typically require a large amount of material to be learned each day requiring long hours at the computer and subsequent negative health effects considering the strain on the students mind and body. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9df1e1c27892,900A879708F0,"Although this isn't accurate for online classes done in conjunction with the school year, the summer geometry class I took often resulted in me working on the computer for upwards of eight hours everyday. Excluding the obvious result that it was a great sacrifice of my time, this amount of length on any electronic results in long term damage to health ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ded2387b27b9,900A879708F0,One can argue students are on their phones for many hours anyway ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c89524ac025c,900A879708F0,"but in combination with having to read a screen for hours, the student must also be actively trying to learn difficult material, which becomes extremely straining on the eyes and taxing on the mind. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9a8490a25f9b,900A879708F0,"Additionally, even taking into consideration that many school systems now implement technology in the classroom, this is still far less than a consistent full day on the computer required by online courses. By taking an online course, you agree to sacrifice your time and health. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26c51fd85f90,900A879708F0,"School educators were trained to provide the best possible education for a student, and by eliminating that invaluable resource by taking an online course, you have know placed an unqualified student in charge of their own self directed education. Any presumable benefit provided by an online course, has a subsequent consequence that is usually not considered. To this day I regret enrolling in that geometry course, as it moved at too fast of a pace to where I consequently find myself struggling to grasp those concepts today. Online courses simply cannot effectively supplement for a students present education in the classroom. Taking online courses does far more harm than any good to students by allowing easy potential for students to struggle to comprehend difficult material without teacher guidance, education at home provides easy accessibility to distractions and cheating without supervision, and long hours of comprehending massive amounts of material can leave the mind and body drained and exhausted. Teachers will always provide the best possible learning experience, and students should always take advantage of that resource. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+75521ce661b1,9071D5352B7E,"It would be unfair to disregard this opportunity from civilians as the right to vote and not give them the chance to prove themselves on whats right for them. This actually improves presidential votes,meaning that electors are recommended to do the responsibilities that the state laws vary ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b80d93efba23,9071D5352B7E,It improves the presidential election and taking it away will cause chaos among electors and presidential candidates. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97016e3e43a8,9071D5352B7E,"As stated in source three, paragraph one ,""The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral college method is not democratic in a modern sense ... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people."" The meaning in this is that people vote for the people who vote people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4aa977873aa,9071D5352B7E,I see no reason to take away this oppportunity though people are still voting in favor of getting the presidential candidate oneself voted for. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+99a3513aae9d,9071D5352B7E,In my point of view i see no reason why you would cancel something without a reason in mind. The states depend on the electors to help out the president during president elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f607fe895ea,9071D5352B7E,"Civilians demand to take charge on whats right for them or what will be in charge of them throughout the next four years. ""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election...."", said richard A. posner in source three. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a1f3d3aca66,9071D5352B7E,"Though the senator may be right about one thing, some electors become opponents to the presidential candidates and oppose or defy the will of people ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9c60a01e5a90,9071D5352B7E,"The electors will refuse to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote or whomever they please, as stated in source two paragraph 11. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+322362e4ffbc,9071D5352B7E,I on the other hand depend on electoral college to proceed and do as they please because they have the right to vote for whomever they please.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+320ab93a66f8,907316B4566B,Changing the election to a vote of popularity is a great idea in my opinion. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d4d16a79f36c,907316B4566B,"Citizens of the United States should be the people making the decision on who the President and Vice President should be. Congress would still have there need there vote of atleast two hundred and seventy member's, and the atleast %51 of the citizen's vote to pass it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0055a45a2de,907316B4566B,"
+The electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of of electors, who in turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d564e8ef9a8,907316B4566B,"After the presidential election, your governor prepares a ""certificate of Ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along wit the names of their respective electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1dca8f20d934,907316B4566B,The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26517110545f,907316B4566B,"The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. Consider the state legislature are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could aleays defy the will of the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+689c8ffdcd97,907316B4566B,"There are five reasons for retaining the electoral college despite its lack of democratic pedigree:
+
+1. Certainy of outcome 2. Evryone's president 3. Swing states 4. Big states 5. Avoid run-off elections 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+643647ccec58,907316B4566B,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Becasue of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+60109cb1a34d,907316B4566B,"During the 2000 campaign, serventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and south Carolina, and oters in twenty five of the largest media markets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8847f2bc1c19,907316B4566B,"The electoral college is unfair and not right. I will have to agree with Bob Dole; ""Abolish the electoral college!""      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+98595d70d0a5,90981BB41313,I am in favor of keeping the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+630aa0530f4d,90981BB41313,I think that it is better and more stable for our economy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0da620fcdc64,90981BB41313,"because not all the time do the people of the state deserve to pick and choose who they think they like. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f49310c1ff3,90981BB41313,The first reason why I am in favor of keeping the electoral college is because I think it is more stable for our economy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+875f7a4ed720,90981BB41313,"The electoal college process consists of the selection of the electors,meeting of the electors where they vote for president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress, Stated by Source 1 #2. Picking the right electors is very important because they are basically picking our president. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how he electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. As stated in Source 3,The electoral college is widley regarded as an anchorism wich is a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by  declaring the candidate who recives the most popular votes the winner, but the electoral college is not democratic in a modern sense. The electoral college in my opinion is organizing and put together, it is way more stable and puts our country in the right place. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c89d51c2eea0,90981BB41313,"The second reason why I am in favor o keeping the electoral college is because I do not think the ""people"" deserve to pick and choose who they think they like. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0276b9e68fd4,90981BB41313,"In most presidential elections the presidents are elected by the percentage of popular votes wich I dont think is right. For example as stated in source 3 # 1, Obama recived 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and romney...Because almost all states award electoral voted on a winne takes all basis, even a very slight plurality in a  stste creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is an even number, but its highly unlikley. Most times the 2 candidates running for president try to persuade the people and some people are fooled by ones promises and when that candidate gets elected  the people do not like the outcome wich messes up alot. The people should go by the important things that the cadidate say they try to fix, not by the promises that they are making to get it done for sure. Stated in Source 3, It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate whp has no hope of carrying their state democrats in texas, for example, or republicans in california. Knowing thier vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay atteneion to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular voters vote swings a national election, and in spite of  that, about one half the eligible American population did  vate in 2012's election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b46ddc287bdf,90981BB41313,In conclusion I am in favor of keeping the electoral college because I think that it is better and morw stable for our economy and that the people do not deserve to pick and choose who they think they like. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cfa149d9e2b3,90A95275B80D,"presidents are elected every four years. Some presidents make changes some presidents don't, society  strongly believes any president elected should make good changes. Any citizen from any state want's the president elected to make a difference, thats clearly one of the presidens duites. Presidents sometimes do not compensate for the mistakes they make that they're not supposed to make ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+00d928498357,90A95275B80D,Citizens votes should be the votes counted for electing presidents and not couted for electing electors ,Position,Adequate,,,
+96aa8219408a,90A95275B80D,"To begin with, most presidnets elected most of the time make no difference and citizens are not content. Presidents have many duties to complete and of them is to make changes and make the world a better place for all citizens. in the article ""In defense of the electoral college: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president"" by Richard A. Posner he states ""when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors"" what the author clearly states is that society is not voting for a presidential candidate but for a slate of electors. This is why most of the time society is not content with the president chosen and bad changes are made. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b48a939af87,90A95275B80D,Citizens are the ones who live in this country so they should be the one's who's votes are counted for electing presidents so that they do not suffer the next four years ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8561a5709ec,90A95275B80D,"To continue, some presidential candidates intentions to society are harmful and do not help them in anyway possible. Presidents intentions while on their four years of being presidents are supposed to help society and make their life easier and not worse. In the article ""The Indefensible Electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer he states ""can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Somtimes."" this quote shows that ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7cf84cc7dc7b,90A95275B80D,not only is society not voting for the presidential candidate they are in favor of but they cant even control who their electors vote for sometimes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4327411d5388,90A95275B80D,Citizens in anyway possible can not vote for the presidential candidate they are in favor of so that means society will not be content for four years and changes will be made that will make their lifes harder and some priveliges will be taken away if the presidents intentions are not helpful. Society will be living in hell in other words. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+31dcb07c5463,90B7EBED2F5E,"The ""Face"" that was found on Mars is not an aliens ",Position,Adequate,,,
+bc1c97500cd0,90B7EBED2F5E,"The ""Face"" is simply just a huge rock formation which resembles a human head ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd8225c237d0,90B7EBED2F5E,If it was an alien the head would have anteanas on it and the head would be shaped differently than it is. Even though it was eighteen long years after the Viking Mission ended that we took a photo of the head doesn't mean that is is and alien. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c4512a4bb35,90B7EBED2F5E,"On April 5,1998, when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) flew over Cydionia for the first time,Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera(MOC) team took a picture. This picture was ten time sharper than the original Viking photos. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+859f1081f7ba,90B7EBED2F5E,"When the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landforn and not and alien. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+982e92441597,90B7EBED2F5E,Well not everyone was happy about it not being an alien ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f5f231ec9aef,90B7EBED2F5E,"It's not easy to find the Cydonia. We just don't pass over the ""Face"" very often. But on April 8,2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia MGS went for another look. This time we rolled the space craft 25 degrees to center the face in the field. Malin's team captured an extradinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+085237aaaf54,90B7EBED2F5E,"In conclusion, what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. The picture was never an alien head. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+118add0bdd45,90CA5D1644D4,There is no prof that and alien could have done that. If they think that they need to have prof that they are right. I might not have evidence that an alien could or couldn't have done that ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+379df033d5b7,90CA5D1644D4,But I know that if an alien did that there would have been life on Mars and we could or would have known by now ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dc98166b8064,90CA5D1644D4,Here is my evidence to what I think about this situation. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+41dcac3b6332,90CA5D1644D4,Like i said if an alien did this we would have know by now ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+039c7794fe9c,90CA5D1644D4,"In various researches they have said and wrote that this is a natural cause. I actually do have prof and evidence about my opinion. On April 5,1998 they took a picture, it was ten times sharper than other pictures they took in the past. Although I get it that lots of people want it to be true that an alien did that, but with what prof? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9f1b85fc2a0,90CA5D1644D4,Many of you think that there are alien markings hidden by haze. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8940cfe6c059,90CA5D1644D4,"But I think this is wrong, ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6a334d2bc6f4,90CA5D1644D4,because they again took another picture and again it showed nothing of alien like. All that was in the picture was a big landform that is also common in the United States. Like i've said this is just natural occuring stuff. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ea8b7055f84,90CA5D1644D4,This happens on earth because of lava when it gets cooled. The same thing happend on Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50e1f89af4d5,90CA5D1644D4,"There is absoultly nothing to lie about or freak out about. Even if they wanted to have an alien to have done that they know that there would have been signs of life on Mars, and because there wasn't many people that think that there were actually aliens they didn't have a choice but to agree with us ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47a38cd94321,90CA5D1644D4,So this is my opinion on what I think of the Face on Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7aa86a2e0aa1,91546651749E,"I can just imagine how the near future ahead may look. From time to time I ask my great grandmother questions about the life she had growing up and im always amazed by the comaparison to the life that I live. I have grown up with technology at my fingertips, techonology from the alarm that wakes me up to the music I listen to on my ipod when I go to sleep. Growing up I don't remember getting lost and having to ever ask for direcions when traveling out of state with my family. We simply used our GPS system. I like watching movies on the car when we go places, and I life the rear camara on the car that helps us drive safely. These new techonologies have made our lives much easier and thanks to those bright minds that have created and innovated the techonlogy we have.
+
+As time goes by, we as a society must make progress, and its clear that we have. Along with progress comes some disagreements and possible dangers thanks to time and acceptace from our society we have made great improvements from, lets say the time my great grandma was just a young girl. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6bb027ba3e5b,91546651749E,"From these I can say that when the question of driveless cars comes up I am all for it. I believe that having to get inside a smart car that ""could drive themselves"", is not a bad thing or idea at all. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+0c7ffe504c95,91546651749E,"""In the 1980's auto makers used speed secors in the creation of anti lock brakes. Within 10 years, those sencors became more advanced. Since 2009 Google has had cars that could drive themselves under under specific conditions."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7211b642c626,91546651749E,The improvents cars have made have been done for own advantage ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8aa5cc66af6f,91546651749E,"yes, one could arugue the dangers of having a driveless car, since a driveless car is not the same as just having better brakes or a Google car that still has a human in control of it ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0829e9a7b6f3,91546651749E,"but it's evident that since the past there have been innovations made to cars and our everyday lives that has only led to greater things through out the decades. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a5ea9a0982bd,91546651749E,These new cars have challeges to overcome and these challeges are the reason some oppose the idea ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+acae8a090ea3,91546651749E,and in some states it is even illegal to even test computer driven cars. Some question their safety and liability in the case of an accident but like anything new it has to start from somewhere in order to improve. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95d6d40ea45e,91546651749E,To this day auto makers are continuing their work on the assuption that problems ahead will be solved and as a member of the future I look foward to those soutions and the positive changes it may bring and I want to be able share progress stories one day of how far we have come. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+78728b1f9e9b,915D19B0AB77,"i am in favor of the
+
+Electoral College ",Position,Adequate,,,
+de5bc193c488,915D19B0AB77,"Electoral Collage the process,not a place Founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between elections of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by the popular vote of qualified citizens.
+
+Electoral Collage consis of the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice presidence,and the counting of the electoral votes by the congress. The
+
+Electoral Collage consis of the 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to select the president. Under the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the district of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the
+
+Electoral Collage .Each canidate running for president in our state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by the canidates political party,but states laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.
+
+President election is held every few hours on tuesday after the first monday in november. You help choose our states electors when you vote for president because when you vote for president because when you vote canidate you are actually voting for your canidates electors. After the presidential election your governor prepares a certificate of ascertainment listing all the candidates who ran for presidenty in your stare along with the names of their respective electors. The certificate of ascertainment declares who the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent. Your state certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives as part of the official recors of the president election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+52136cecb7e8,915D19B0AB77,"Why people think the
+
+Electoral collage is wrong? Because over 60% percent of the voter would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+94dd1ab9bcb2,915D19B0AB77,This year the voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+277558680ac4,915D19B0AB77,"Whats the bad thing about the
+
+Electoral collage is that voters vote not for the president, but for a slate electors,who in turn elect the president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+28dd9bfa591a,915D19B0AB77,"Peaple dissagre with the
+
+Electoral collage do to the fact is is unfair to voters. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+556b6eb63a2a,915D19B0AB77,"Because of the winner take-all system in each state,canidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. Those are mostly the main reason why the people do not want the
+
+Ellectoal collage to continue they want to be the one who choose who is winning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc3fc9324aea,915D19B0AB77,"I agree with the
+
+Electoral collage and think it should continue with it. I think the president and the congress ahould continue to decide who is the winner they got more expirience and know who will be the best person to continue with it and win the
+
+Electoral collage ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dafb8f88bfc0,916117BFE2A1,"Many citizens in the United States vote for whom they believe will acheive the goals and standards of serving as the U.S President. People think the process of voting is simple, but is it really? In the U.S, there is the Electoral College, which is'nt such a good thing for some people. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+eda4ab822c57,916117BFE2A1,That is why I'm in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f90059c69652,916117BFE2A1,voters can't control whom their electors vote for ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ebf0278f02fd,916117BFE2A1,"the people in the U.S have a say of what goes on in their country, including the election of the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bba444fa1787,916117BFE2A1,"The Electoral College process allows citizens to vote for an elector in their state whom they believe will choose their prefered president. If the elector of their choice wins the statewide election with 87 votes, the elector votes for their prefered president along with the 87 votes. As stated in source 2 ""Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always."" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+875f150a8f76,916117BFE2A1,"When the elector votes for their prefered president, all the votes used on that elector counts for the president. Instead of going through this whole process, would'nt it be less of a struggle to just have citizens vote for the president of their choice and win by popular votes? Also stated in source 2 ""Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes."" This shows how the Electoral College is difficult to understand for some people. The Unites States consists of many people who come from other counrties and speak other languages. This makes it even more complicated for some to understand even if the process is translated, and just by eliminating this process, it could make Presidential elections less complicated. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1aae1c87439a,916117BFE2A1,The U.S is different from any other place in the world. It is a free counrty! The citizens have a say in what happens in their counrty. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89545f43caf7,916117BFE2A1,"The people make the decisions, the people vote for what they want and the people should be able to elect a president they believe will give them that! According to source 3 ""... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people."" Why can't the people be the electors? If the people in the United States don't have the freedom to vote for a president of their choice, what say do they really have? Electing a president is like raising money for charity, the president does all the work but all they money that is raised goes to charity (the people). The people want someone who will help raise the money for them, not screw over their charity. Just like when signing up for a job the boss needs to see your resume, is like the people needing to see what the president can do to help their country. The citizens should be the ones making the decisions with help from the president that they believe could help with such decisions, not from electors who believe so. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19f49966ec26,916117BFE2A1,"Electing a president is very important to the country. Electing the president that people think could help support the U.S is also very important but very difficult as well. People should be able to easily vote for their prefered president with no difficulty, which happens to be caused by the Electoral College. By aborting this process, voters could control who they vote for and have a say in their country by voting for their prefered president. Having citizens tricked into voting for an elector is not the way to elect a president. Should'nt people in the Unites States have a say in who their president should be without being tricked?                         ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e979452bdb5a,9165D265E932,"Everyone loves the idea of being able to stay home and complete all of their work from home. Sounds good right? Well it might not be as good as you think it would. Being home schooled, as some would call it, is not as beneficial as someone would think. Yes, the idea of having to wake up in the morning and go to school is hard for most people, but in reality going to an actual physical school can help you in many ways. Some people argue that even though this might be true it's still better for kids to do their work at home. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8b938651f661,9165D265E932,"I believe that students will not benefit from attending classes from home; in fact, it will probably hurt the students more than it should ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b6b75a7791ae,9165D265E932,by not helping them prepare for the real world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a551084d989,9165D265E932,"Most students dislike the idea of waking up in the morning and going to school, but they don't realize that school will eventually help them prepare for the real world. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2c93eb3e362b,9165D265E932,"In every single class offered at school, from math to art, each class is able to teach their students something valuable that will help them succeed in the future. For example, it's very important that everyone no matter their age has good communication skills and is able to work well with others. If kids don't attend school then how are they going to be able to strengthen these important skills if they're at home. It's very important for someone to have these skills in order for them to function in the real world. Imagine getting a part time job at your favorite cafe and then getting fired because you can't communicate well and work with your fellow employees. That would be horrible and could potentially happen again because of the lack of basic skills. By going to school we can assure that kids learn these skills and will be able to do well on: job interviews, be able to communicate with others, and work well with anyone they meet. Time goes by fast and sooner than later kids will grow up and venture out into the real world we must make sure they are ready; and this can only be done if they attend school regularly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7e5c9266425c,9165D265E932,We all have that one subject that stresses us so much our heads feel like they're going to explode any minute. Well by attending a physical school it may help you get some of the stress off. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+25f3475f57c2,9165D265E932,"Schools have a day where both teachers and students can meet in order to do missing work or get the extra help they need. My school for example offers a specific class called lancer time where kids get a pass from their teachers and go to them for any reason possible. If you still need help then you can stay after school on a specific day and there is transportation provided. This is very convenient because if at any given moment a student needs help with something they can go and get it. Home schooled students don't have this option because they are being taught at home and arent' attending a school. This is very inconvenient because what would happen if a student needs help with something, they won't be able to get the help they need. If you attend a physical school then it's going to be very easy for you to get the help you need whenever you need it. Another way is by going to a class full of people you can get someone, like a friend, to help you and then you can both compare work to see if you are doing it right. If you're home schooled then you don't really have the option to have your friend help you or have any way of making sure your work is correct. That being said it's better for students to go to an actual physical school, so that they are able to get the help they need in order to succeed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c7e733dc1bb7,9165D265E932,Just like every person is different every teacher will also be different. Some take their time explaining things while other teach so fast you don't get the chance to take notes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bcd610a8ca72,9165D265E932,That being said if students are able to attend classes from home then they will be able to self pace themselves especially in classes that are hard for them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+93ca1ae7683e,9165D265E932,"Let's say they're not that good at math, if they're at home they can take their time in order for them to fully understand the concept. By allowing them to do the work at home we are helping them more, than by sending them to school and watching as they don't understand anything because of how fast the class pace is. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+42770ddae8b8,9165D265E932,"Another thing being, if they're at home they will focus much better unlike school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+24cbf8f6ce8d,9165D265E932,"where one can barely focus due to how loud some people can be. This will have a big impact on how they function, at school they might not focus due to all of the noise,and fail, but at home it's quiet and they will be able to focus way better. We all want our students to do well in school and the only way to ensure that is if we allow students to attend classes from home. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6e004c44f107,9165D265E932,"In conclusion, students will not benefit from attending classes from home because they aren't going to be well prepared to venture out into the real world. Everyone needs an important set of skills in order for them to function and this can only be done by attending an actual physical school. We should all make sure that every single students is well prepared for the world. We want them to accomplish great things and be able to feel happy about what they accomplished. That being said the only way for students to feel that way is by sending them to school. Even though the idea of being able to attend classes from home sounds really good it will not help you prepare. It's more important to go to an actual school to learn the necessary things you will need than by doing classes from home and not be prepare for the real world.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1bb90a42f8b3,916958737B60,Could attending classes from home via online or video conference be a beneficial option that schools offer? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6545f74be705,916958737B60,I believe it would be a good option to have ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b76ab40f69d8,916958737B60,for those having problems with bullying. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72361cd1d492,916958737B60,Bullying is still a big problem across the world causing depression among young teens. Having online school as an option for those who go through harassment and or assault could help decrease the rate of depression among teens. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+461fd9137998,916958737B60,"Another factor is getting more sleep. Typically when teachers ask how much sleep their students get at home the in my experience the usual response is five to six hours. The recommended amount of sleep teens should be getting at least is eight hours and at most ten. The teachers on the other hand aren't surprised by those numbers the students come out with due to how many of them play sports and take AP classes. This can also cause a lot of stress like on test days, important sports competitions, or cramming in assignments last minute because other classes are assigning multiple projects due in the same week. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a0c9c138d1b6,916958737B60,Attending classes at home would mean they have the option to start thier classes at a later time assuring that they can sleep in in the morning to get the extra few hours they're missing out on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b1eca36efc7,916958737B60,Not getting enough sleep effects the productivity of the student which could prevent them from finishing papers on time then having their grades drop. Which could all lead into depression ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da9d6f9e8f79,916958737B60,"Making friends at school can be pretty difficult, especially at schools where there are ""social classes."" For example: A teen who is more anti-social would have a harder time than someone who is much more comfortable talking with big crowds. Or even someone whose being bullied or have a mental issue they can't do anything about. This could also induce stress to the teen when assigned a group project or assignment ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9737bb3aeed,916958737B60,Attending an online course would help them in that manner of not being comfortable around others. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7c54c4680a2,916958737B60,Could not having friends also be a problem? Not having friends could also cause depression in the teen which could lead into showing less effort and not having motivation to complete assignments ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd41c5bfb348,916958737B60,Would taking classes at home make the teen become lazy? ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3651870e22b5,916958737B60,"Its possible to happen due to the work environment, it could definitely cause distractions like working next to the television or their cellular device ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+723989247ff5,916958737B60,As long as the teen can be in a closed environment with less distractions it should not be that big of a problem ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c095c56d7443,916958737B60,It is also likely that they try and cheat on assignments ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+710e70b1bcc3,916958737B60,but it would more or less show when taking a test without knowing the required knowledge that they just took off of the internet ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9d03c2bf015f,916958737B60,"In conclusion attending online course could be beneficial to those struggling to attend school while dealing with bullying, stress, and or depression. It can also help work on their independence in the future with colledge or a day job. Even though it can also cause a few problems like laziness, it can easily be solved through motivation. Overall it should be provided by more schools so that parents can consider it an option. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ce016c2ddf4c,917E4889D3EF,I write to you because I believe we should keep the electoral college . There's so many reasons why I believe this would be better for the goverment and for the community . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d41ca2b2b4b2,917E4889D3EF,"Yes , I understand the college is old and out dated ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d73cee8a2744,917E4889D3EF,it is what has picked our leaders and until now I believe it has been very effective ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+467b10dad614,917E4889D3EF,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0847416f7dd6,917E4889D3EF,Even though we can not control who the electors vote for ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+56e6cdc8c25b,917E4889D3EF,I still believe it is a more effective way and it avoids plenty of unessary conflicts ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63f999e6c0c0,917E4889D3EF,"Although we are "" not voting for the president "" we are "" voting for the electors "" . This is what had kept our country running for centuries ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d8a5b0be85f,917E4889D3EF,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no condidate receives a majority of the vote cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca0238c6adfd,917E4889D3EF,The electoral college is the most effective way to pick our leaders .    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+68d989397410,91962F622C5A,I think that all students should do community. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a71edecb2d64,91962F622C5A,I think this because it help out our country. We will have less trash all over the streets. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d14316952d36,91962F622C5A,There will be more stuff we can put in the recycling bin instead of throwing it away we can renew it save on killing in trees that we killing in rainforest. animals in water will not die if we don't throw things in sewers. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d96ba64e13b0,91962F622C5A,If we watch parents kids for them that will save time them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+52e6ec48f8a8,91962F622C5A,If we tutor little elementary kids that will help them improve their grades better in their classroom. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+84276dac3e18,91962F622C5A,We can go to the elderly hospital and help the workers with their jobs. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e4536da5711e,91962F622C5A,The senior citizens might would like to talk to some young kids every once in a while. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b7d329ca602,91962F622C5A,We should help some adults ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b87ee39bebb2,91B00B44402B,"It may be true that some of us do abuse the fact that we are allowed cell phones at school. However, many of us respect our teachers and leave our phones turned off, only using them when permitted. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4fcba502eb25,91B00B44402B,It would be a horrible and unfair thing to do for the school to take our phone privileges away. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+198f3b8d5166,91B00B44402B,"Many students may use them during class when they are supposed to be paying attention to their teachers, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f7570667f28c,91B00B44402B,but not all students ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+6c9a4f245ee5,91B00B44402B,". Phones are a fun way to talk to our friends and family, even if they shouldn't be used during class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+722685288030,91B00B44402B,"Phones are also great for emergencies, whether it's to call your parents about a school bus running late or if it's calling the police for a wanted criminal taking you hostage at the school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8e373de2f32e,91B00B44402B,"For this reason, new school policies could just be effecting the safety of the students. Many of us love our phones and would hate for our rights to be completely taken away. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f598774501c,91B00B44402B,"In addition, some students need their phones ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bf96f82e8b7,91B00B44402B,"Protective parents may require their children to call or text them during break time to let them know they're doing okay. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3298b1d97f1b,91B00B44402B,Cell phones are a great source for entertainment as well as a social device ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fe045befe14,91B00B44402B,"Some people can put music or games on their phones to listen to or play during the day. Anti-social students may like using this during break time and lunch time to entertain themselves. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d38881d7704,91B00B44402B,"What harm would it do to allow students to use their phones during their lunch and break times? Class wouldn't be disrupted, teachers wouldn't be annoyed, and the students would still be able to have the phones that they enjoy using every day. By changing the phone policy, the school would be taking our rights away. This is also very unfair to those who use their phones outside of class. If we can't be trusted with phones only during our break times, then the school would be showing us great disrespect ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2d4def8e7c09,91B1F82B2CF1,Many people may think that attending school online is better than going to school in person. They say that it is better for mental heath and classes can be more advanced or personal for the one student. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+0a6634792991,91B1F82B2CF1,"I would say that I disagree with that statement, although on some aspects I do agree. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e73c3a854460,91B1F82B2CF1,"Yes, online school would be better for students' mental health now ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+57d92e1dddb3,91B1F82B2CF1,but what about in the future when they lack basic social skills? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4e57f20c26e0,91B1F82B2CF1,"yes, the online courses could be more personalized to a specific student on some softwares ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2e8d1ead6a99,91B1F82B2CF1,not all. Even if online school is more personalized that would leave the student with a very self involved attitude that would not bode well for them in their future lives. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cef7e3667fca,91B1F82B2CF1,People with the idea that online school is the better option also have the misguided notion that waking up when one pleases is a good thing. This would be correct if it were in moderation ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+764225413a40,91B1F82B2CF1,"however, I would argue that practicing to wake up on time for school is a valuable life skill that will most certainly benefit students in their future lives. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+093a12dbd472,91B1F82B2CF1,"In the real world, employers are not going to wait around for whenever their employee wakes up, they are going to set a time when the employee should be at work and expect them to be there. Employers aren't usually looking for candidates that show up late to interviews or employees who show up late to work every day. Not being punctual can not only hurt people in their professional lives, but also in their personal lives. Friends, family members, and significant others are going to want to invite their loved one to breakfasts, lunches, parties, and more and are going to be upset and angry when they show up late or not at all, which could end up with that person losing a lot of people whom they care about ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+00ec98773bda,91B1F82B2CF1,Compromise is a skill that is required in the real world because no one gets everything that they want and when there are arguments or disputes the only way to solve them is to compromise. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb48bea2f550,91B1F82B2CF1,"This is another skill that is very frequently learned in public schools due to the amount of students and how different they are, it is also something that online school curriculum lacks because it is a commonly practiced behavior. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4d1026aaf79,91B1F82B2CF1,"Often times, people who are homeschooled lack social skills, not all but as a generalization. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d17d9c6e0abf,91B1F82B2CF1,"Many public schools offer organizations and clubs such as DECCA or FCCLA for students to learn business, public speaking and organizational skills. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+989400cf7054,91B1F82B2CF1,It is true that online students most likely would be able to join these programs ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+038cfbf972a9,91B1F82B2CF1,but it would be more difficult for them as the programs are based on school activities and organized around the school schedule. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e46b3a1c078e,91B1F82B2CF1,"People who attend online school may feel like outsiders in these groups of students of which all go to the same public school. To add to the social skills provided by public schools, students even attain social skills just by showing up and interacting with their peers, teachers, and administrators. Students who are schooled online may not know what type of relationship or the nature of interactions they should have with future employers or coworkers because that is something that puclic school students practice every day without thought, therefore it is not in the curriculum for the online students to learn ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+65665fa1cb3c,91B1F82B2CF1,"Branching off of social skills, online school students may not know how to interact with those who are different than them due to only being exposed to their family and neighbors on a daily basis. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b5fc91b0e049,91B1F82B2CF1,"Public school students encounter people of many different races, religions, sexualities, ableness, and neuro activity. Because of this, these students have no problem facing the real world with all the people who are nothing like them. Online students may experience a type of culture shock when they go to college or enter the workforce and meet a person who is a different race than them, someone with a disibility, a person on the autism spectrum, or even a person who practices a different religion than they do. This is a sensation unknown to most public school students because of how they are exposed to many different and diverse groups of people at a young age. This type of culture shock could cause problems for these online students in our increasingly open-minded and progressive world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6d4addff5c19,91B1F82B2CF1,One of the apparent reasons that students attend online school is to escape bullying ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9f826949f0c5,91B1F82B2CF1,"Statistically, bullying has reduced significantly in the past 30 years, yet these are the years when online school was introduced. No one can justify targeted and repetative bullying, however, light teasing can actually create thicker skin and teach students how to cope with people being rude to them and how to handle constructive or not so constructive critisism which are heavily prevailant in the real world ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f6b45f782663,91B1F82B2CF1,"Consequently, the new technology that made online school an option also created a new type of bullying, cyberbullying. Even attending school online cannot prevent one from being cyberbullied as it is through the very technology the use for their education. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c94b9ae6c2ee,91B1F82B2CF1,"In public schools students can learn how to deal with bullies and how to react when people are less than nice to them but online school students may not know how to handle cyberbullying and become unstable. This contradicts the argument that online school is better than public schools for the mental health of students. Many public schools now have zero tolerance bullying policies and have student clubs and organizations that conduct in-school activities to counteract bullying and provide safe spaces for students. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e023de8ac51b,91B1F82B2CF1,"Ultimately, there are benefits and disadvantages to both online and public school and all students are different so it is up to parents and students to communicate and find what is the right choice for them. The question I believe should be posed when deciding between an online school and a public school is, how are people supposed to adapt and learn from the world if they are sheltered from the very world they are meant to grow with? The answer is very simple, they cannot.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2283b69feb1c,91E61EF42E33,"I disagree with your idea to require students to participate in community services. In my opinion we should have a choice in those sorts of things. Not only that but, what about homework, family, and other school or home related activities? ",Position,Effective,,,
+2516f6a44626,91E61EF42E33,There are some up sides to that idea and i understand that it would help the environment and make the neighborhood look a lot better. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+57d527eae0bb,91E61EF42E33,"But, what about what the children want? ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+682ebcc76f6c,91E61EF42E33,I'm positive that there are some students that may want to do that and that is great. Let those individuals choose what they would like to do. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+052108191cc2,91E61EF42E33,"For example, someone might need some extra credit and they could do the community service to earn that. Another idea is to make that an extra activity like sports or band. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fad457b25448,91E61EF42E33,When would the students have time for the community service? Would it be during or after school? In my point of view either way would be interfering with either grades or home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3e692258883f,91E61EF42E33,it would be best to allow the students themselves choose what they want to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d7af3bc19ed,91E61EF42E33,Then there will have to be parents involved too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b5425442aac,91E61EF42E33,You would need their permission for their kids to do community service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c4cbbdf7920,91E61EF42E33,How about you hold a vote? Then you can see some willing participants. You could also send home a question form for the parents to find out their point of view. Either way you may end up with a few people that will agree with you. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fc68a4d4664,91E61EF42E33,whatever you do is up to you ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+93d5c8574e51,91EDDCB68A9E,"The Electoral collage is a process , not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as comprimise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1f89c02999f1,91EDDCB68A9E,"The thing is the president shouldnt be picked on his personality or his or hers past, they should be judged by the changes they can make and how they can make it better for the people on the out side world. they shouldnt be voted by the fancy no good stuck ups in the office 24/7 bc half the time they dont know good, i mean look at the president we have now. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e0271fac6a1b,91EDDCB68A9E,"The process consists of the section of the electors, which they vote president or vice president. under the Electoral collage system voters vote not for president but for a state of elections ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+264e8a69b0b3,91EDDCB68A9E,"They shouldnt have to vote like that , why have the office men and women vote president? When u could have the citizens of state do it. The office men and women dont know what the citizens want or need. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+67566292a927,91EDDCB68A9E,There just there to get money and sit on there butts 24/7 and do nothing but make poor decisions as a reference to our president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d830e10f65f,91EDDCB68A9E,"The most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. Then in that case the election would be thrown to The House of Representatives , where state delegations vote on the president. There shouldnt be a tie and having to be thrown in to The House of Represntatives ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7ca71520634,91EDDCB68A9E,The president shouldnt be selected by valets and posters. they should be picked based apone what there capable of and how they can change the owrld and make it a better and safer place ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+400eb0244c7f,91EDDCB68A9E,The president we have now didnt come with its benifites. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac2cbf0d540d,91EDDCB68A9E,"At all basic levels the Electoral collage is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each states, candidates dont spend time in each state they know they have no changes of winning or losing , so they focus only on the tight races. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e016968a1e80,91F40B0CFCC3,As a student of your school i think that community service should be mandatory for all students. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c4f1d55abd8d,91F40B0CFCC3,If we have community service it will make our community a nicer place to be with happier people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+13a0dcae56d9,91F40B0CFCC3,Also it will make it cleaner and not filled with garbage. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+707e4a3adadb,91F40B0CFCC3,Lastly it will help out our environment. this town needs it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c732ce5999f2,91F40B0CFCC3,"For an hour we could do things like clean up garbage. We could do things for the people and help our senior citizens, help the children of working parents, or even help people who are having dangerous though and who are unhappy. Also we could build something, maybe help build a park or even a new building. If any of these things were done it would benefit the community tremendously ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0babcdd12695,91F40B0CFCC3,There is garbage on the sides of highways and streets that have been sitting there forever. We could clean up parks and make them safer for children to play on. Also we could wash graffiti off of buildings by paint over them or scrubbing it off. This will only take one hour a week and will be something fun that all of the middle school kids can do together with their friends. Also it will make all the fun places around town safer for everyone. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+da5debd99b7b,91F40B0CFCC3,"There are things that animals will die if they eat, like gum for instance they will choke on it and die. Also many birds die each year from those rings that hold soda and beer cans, they usually wrap around there necks and kill the animals. Lastly if we put the garbage in bins the animals may not come into neighbor hoods and then will avoid being hit by cars. Just one hour of our time can save the lives of many animals. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3e94db671897,91F40B0CFCC3,we need to have community service here in our town. If we have community service it will benefit the community and its citizens. Secondly it will make the town a cleaner place to live with less garbage and debris. Lastly it will help our environment and hopefully save the lives of many animals and plants. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b90d1b57be99,9244152BE347,I would argue in favor of keeping the electoral college ,Position,Effective,,,
+0838c55e9816,9244152BE347,its bests to vot eby what the people want in able to keep a good country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37587377ae76,9244152BE347,if people werent allowed to vote how would the main leaders know whats the right and what is the wrong. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a09b288157ab,9244152BE347,"To start off , due to the passage ''Electoral college'' is a process in which the founding fathers established in the constitution as a compromise election of the president by congress and qualified citizens! NOT the leaders ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f2dcb145e7d,9244152BE347,If your want to run for president your main goal is to get people to follow you with impression and facts ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+051bae90b959,9244152BE347,"Each presidential election occurs every four years. Candidates enter in election competing against each other,'' the people'' watch if the candidate will be worth a president. Candidates will be eliminated one after another till there is only one winner. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f8610ea92f7,9244152BE347,Without the electoral college how would the people know if the president is trustworthy to the country ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11a5f9a07b6a,9244152BE347,mainly people just want someone who is willing  to make the right changes. Like i said the leader's main goal is to get people to agree  and make them think that you are worth for the job. No one will appreciate someone making the laws without people agreeing the people would be furious and the word freedom wouldnt exsist anymore in the country. Freedom is all about peoples rights ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4bfee4fd0cad,9244152BE347,Electoral college is a main process that is need to be able to make freedom for the citizens.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b47eb275a24b,9247667DBA49,"I remeber My sixteenth birthday I woke up bright and early and went stright to the BMV. I was about to get the best gift that could be given to a teenager a gift of freedom,trust,and responsbility I was going to get my lisence. I was so excited to begin driveing I loved it driverless cars would take the joy of driving away. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1f192c08fa1f,9247667DBA49,I dont think we should continue to spend a bunch of money devolping driverless cars. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+978f7b3dba2e,9247667DBA49,There will always be need for human alertness in the vehicle. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+264dba01c92f,9247667DBA49,What happens when there is a crash who is responsble the manufacture or owner of the smart car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2045ce07af17,9247667DBA49,"With driverless cars there would no longer be any excitment of getting your lisence. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+6eb3e30c9c87,9247667DBA49,Driverless cars are so expenseive its not practical to own one ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3d2ecd01e23c,9247667DBA49,On googles driverless car there radar system for one car cost two hundred million dollers. Who realisticly has two hundred million dollers to spend on a prius. With cost like that these cars are mor of a televison fantisy than a practicality. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a6e70bc690d,9247667DBA49,If you were to buy a driver less car you would expect to relax during the car ride. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+44854e50a5e4,9247667DBA49,Actually driveless cars still and will always require human assitance. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6de8104c7c9b,9247667DBA49,""" all driverless cars are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a187f290cf7,9247667DBA49,These driverless cars arnt really driverless the will always require human alertness and asitance while in the vihicle. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3829cc9856d8,9247667DBA49,What will happen if you are in a smart car and there is a crash. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3287708b133d,9247667DBA49,"All it would take to breack my computer at home is to spill some grape soda on it. What will happen if the technolgy fails and you hit a pedestrian or anothier car. Who would be responsible for an accident the owner of the car or the manufacturer. ""new laws will be needed in order to cover lialbility in the case of an accident"". "" Driving laws focus on keeping drivers, pasengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that saftey is best achieved with an alert driver"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1b22706ab3d,9247667DBA49,"The devolpment of driverless cars is a waste of our time and money. Cars will always be somewhat dependent on humans the will never be truly driverless. there will be many liability issuse if an accedent takes place. And what will be the fun in getting your lisence to just sit in a car that drivers itself. I want my children to feel the same way I did when I turned sixteen. I want to be able to give them same gift my dads gave me the gift of reponsbility, trust, and freedom.        ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+08d3a0797167,924D8175D100,"Many adults are suspicious of students if they call in stick. This suspicion is not unfounded either, many high school students feign sickness to get out of tests or to escape an impending due date. But for some students, feigning an illness is not an option. For these high achieving students, being sick could mean a week of catching up on missed material, even if only one day of class is missed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+60edc4099754,924D8175D100,"Although some students may try to take advantage of a long distance learning system, it can greatly reduce the stress of missing class and keep students from falling behind. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+7a474faaee70,924D8175D100,Implementing a long distance learning approach would reduce the stress of missing class commonly felt by high achieving students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+abafcade9b80,924D8175D100,"High school schedules can be so packed with classes, missing only one day can lead to a week or more of trying to catch up on tests, assignments, and notes. These students, to avoid missing class, often downplay illnesses that otherwise would have kept them at home. A long distance learning approach would allow students who are sick to stay at home while still learning, participating in class, and getting any important dates or other information that may have been mentioned in the class. This will reduce the time the student must spend catching up and encourage the student to stay at home when they are sick. This, in turn, will keep diseases like the flu from spreading rapidly through the school system as fewer students come to class sick. If the lessons are recorded, a student missing school for an event can catch up on classes at times teachers are usually unavailable. Many students choose not to attend academic competitions, extracurricular activities, and other important events during the school day because of the fear of missing class. Recording lectures encourages these students to pursue academic enrichment outside of the classroom as they do not have to worry as much about catching up on classes. They can play back these recordings during times when teachers are not commonly available which decreases the time it takes students to catch up on missed work, thus reducing the stress of missing class. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ff7f5a472f0,924D8175D100,Adding a long distance learning system to the classroom would also prevent chronically ill students who cannot attend classes regularly from falling behind. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+88c0f791d5f2,924D8175D100,"Many students with illnesses such as Lyme disease are forced to skip class due to their illness. If too many days are missed, the student can fall behind in class and many be forced to repeat a class or an entire year. This causes an unneeded burden on the student, the family, and the school system. The aforesaid parties would greatly benefit from a remote learning system as the chronically ill student would be able to keep pace with the class from home. This reduces the probability that the student fails the class and is forced to repeat it. By making lectures available online, these students, and all students for that matter, would be given the chance to earn a higher grade as working outside of the class is more efficient. Students who want to study for an exam can go back through old lectures to ensure that they know all of the important information presented in class. This would result in higher grades, fewer failing students, and a better chance of success in college and later in life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b2d3fd372e46,924D8175D100,Implementing a remote learning system may encourage some students to skip class for no reason. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d119323eec2f,924D8175D100,"On the surface, more students skipping class seems undesirable, but a remote learning system will allow these students, who may have skipped class anyway, to keep up with the class. Students who were absent from class could be required to check the video recording for the classes they missed which would ensure that all students know what happened in class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f71baf2e35b1,924D8175D100,"Even if more students skip class, implementing this system would ensure that all students know what happened in class whether they were present or not and will minimize the likelihood of a student falling behind. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+4ddd70547c05,924D8175D100,"High school can be a time of great stress on students. The level of performance mandated by some classes requires students spend more time and effort than ever before to maintain academic performance. Given that, it is important that all students are supported at this stage in their life. A bad or stressful experience in high school can discourage students from pursuing college or other challenging achievements. Implementing a long distance learning system at the high school level would give students the support they need to make the best of their high school experience and continue learning throughout their life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+239fc7b53918,924FE77F61C9,"Every four years a new president is elected to run the United states of America. Which is caried out by a process called Electoral College Process. It is a meeting of various electors,in where they vote for President and Vice President. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+199a407f1642,924FE77F61C9,"I firmly believe that this process should be abolished, and the President and Vice President should be chosen by popular votes. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b5cbfa3ad26f,924FE77F61C9,"For starters, the leader of the free world should be choosen directly by the American citizens ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+647368d986e8,924FE77F61C9,"It must bruise like a birthday punch to know those who waited in lenghty lines for hours upon end, didn't obtain the President they bargined for because of electoral votes rather than popular. It is stated that ""over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now""
+
+Source 2 Paragraph 9.
+
+More than half of America's citizens would prefer direct election. So why aren't the officials giving America what they want? Possiblity to hold us captive in the ""free world"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba35c551d105,924FE77F61C9,"Another reason why the Electoral College process should be abolished, is the fact that we the people have to trust a complete stranger. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62ca295254ed,924FE77F61C9,"Trusting a complete stranger with hands of your future is a difficult task to do. Seeing that most people in possession of power got there using propaganda. Posner believes that ""each party selcts a sdlate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)...""
+
+Source 3 Paragraph 16 . How is he completly sure about this? Hitler decieved his people and promised them ""better days"", and we all know how that went. The Elctoral College process is just not trustworthy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae0f342c7b3f,924FE77F61C9,"All in all the Electoral College should be abolished and replaced with direct elections. This gives citizens more control over who they elect (which is supposed to happen in a Democracy). The people now freedom of choice, and the majority would be happy with the new leader of the free world.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+10ddf71ec2f3,9288FF19115E,Sometimes when children get kick out of school they do Community Service. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+34bfbf36cdbb,9288FF19115E,I think all school's should make they children do Community Service. It's something to keep them busy and keep them out of trouble. Community Service is one of they punishments we have. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+02496ed93eed,9288FF19115E,Well to start it off. Community Service is a important thing to do. It keep your culture looking wonderful. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47b88e200dae,9288FF19115E,"Most of the times you can do community service just by helping someone with they yard work. Its a activity for most people. My brother love doing community service , he love people , and the people love him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+595d25315be9,9288FF19115E,Community Service help a lot of minors that need something to do ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8b6d8b82e9c,9288FF19115E,", and i think that will help most of them do right. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1db8e7d5bccb,9288FF19115E,Most of the time you see men doing Community Service by picking up trash or helping someone with a house. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+82a54c9d8aa4,9288FF19115E,I think Community Service will keep some of them out of trouble. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d26b3b92e7ce,9288FF19115E,"Its a policy for some people to do community Service if they get kick out of school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+270936e65ab3,9288FF19115E,"because the judge probably told them they had to do Community Service. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fff77876f11a,9288FF19115E,"Community Service is like helping someone stay out of trouble. Keep you busy at all times and doing the right things. It Keep you from doing the wrong thing at the wrong time. Community Service is like a job, but you not getting paid out of it. Most of time some people can do community service by doing the right thing or they can do something with they life by doing community service.
+
+Community Service is a activity , and i think we should do Community Service. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87b5e6126e15,92B43D8267C7,"i believe that smart cars, or driverless cars, are a thing of the future. only the future. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3c17cdc4529b,92B43D8267C7,"smart cars seem like a good idea to some, mostly the people that can not drive, due to handicap. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+88b6c6801711,92B43D8267C7,"the cars wouldnt be driving themselves, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d568a1e0e3d9,92B43D8267C7,"they would only do simple tasks. such as, steer, accelerate, and brake. humans can do all of that, and more, just fine. the cars ""heads up display"" can work miracles. yet, if the driver isnt paying any attention to them, then the whole thought goes down the drain. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc07cd7149f9,92B43D8267C7,"if one of these ""smart cars"" where to get in a road accedent, would it be the manufacturers or the drivers fault. i beileve that it would be the manufacterers fault. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+84c99b7b50bb,92B43D8267C7,"if the car has a faulty sytem. then there may be more danger in these cars, than any good. Also, google had announced its first smart car accident, March 1st, 2016. thankfully no one was hurt, but it just shows these cars are not perfect, by any means.   ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2faa3bffed7a,92CB9173A201,"In 1976 NASA released a photo of a landform on Mars resembling a human face. Not everyone was easily convinced that it was only just a landmass though. Conspiracy theorists believed that it was, ""Bona fide evidence of life on Mars."" In the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars,"" the author, Garvin, believed that it was only a mesa. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+34e6b43f90cc,92CB9173A201,I agree with Garvin that this landmass was not an alien or proof of aliens whatsoever. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+354e495ec2c0,92CB9173A201,"There is a large amount of proof in the article that was confirmed by NASA that this face is only a landmass, nothing more. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b2e10f40cd94,92CB9173A201,"In paragraph two of the article the author claimed that mesa's were ordinary in Cydonia, area the mesa was located, according to scientists. The only difference between this mesa and other mesa's found on Mars is that it had uncommon shadows over it illustrating eyes and a mouth. Since mesa's are common in this area it is very unlikely that this, ""face,"" was anything different than just an average mesa taken at an odd angle with a low quality camera. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0628cfe83981,92CB9173A201,The author also stated in paragraph seven that in 1998 that the photo was retaken with a higher quality camera. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+636a451163ae,92CB9173A201,"NASA released the photo onto a JPL website once the photo was confirmed and the only thing found was not an alien monument, but a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+179605e78d28,92CB9173A201,Many people still doubted that it was a mesa after this photo due to wispy clouds bluring the picture of the monument. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+04df8e8a3698,92CB9173A201,"According to paragraph ten in the article, the picture was taken one last time of the landmass revealing the same thing, an average mesa. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9894458a0e70,92CB9173A201,Mesa's also are found commonly in the american west as said in paragraph eleven. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d3619480ee52,92CB9173A201,"The mesa resembles the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho. The two mesa's share a similiar height, appearence, and were not alien monuments. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42a2a4a3c654,92CB9173A201,"People argue that the mesa in Ohio doesn't have a face appearing on the top, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ec3d836d8b59,92CB9173A201,but the only reason the mesa on Mars has a face is due to the angle at which the picture was taken as I said earlier in my piece. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fd77e53251d0,92CB9173A201,The two oppsing sides in this argument have evidence to argue their opinion. The belief that the mesa is actually a face is inncorect due to evidence in the article and my essay. Mesa's are common in the area the picture was taken and the face was caused by shadows along with a low quality camera. Whichever side you are on I believe I have brought forth enough evidence to change your opinion or strengthen your opionion that there was no alien lifeforms yet found on Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2ad06525e1cd,92E97E947628,i have herd that you are deciding whether all students should perform in the community service. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7160c5ea1c5f,92E97E947628,I think it will be a great idea for our school and for our community ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec13a02e647e,92E97E947628,This will be able to help people know that if we do are work together as a group we will accomplish more work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+132bbd1032bd,92E97E947628,that not just one man can do everything but if we are united we will succeeds. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4405ff18e986,92E97E947628,doing all of this it will be able to make are town cleaner and let people know that we care about this town. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06e9125927d3,92E97E947628,By the way this will be a great opportunity for our community to be clean so if different people who comes from different places will make good judgement about are community and maybe they might tell their friends how they think about it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbcc7ce967bc,92E97E947628,I hope you make your mind to say yes but whatever you choose I will still be happy with it. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+61adb545f8f3,93106B20FE87,i believe that the students of this school should be required to do community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e2ccfd23bd25,93106B20FE87,i believe so because even if they don't want to they should still have to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b27f75c2ade,93106B20FE87,doing community service helps learn about the responsibilities of being an adult. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f7abfa408e5,93106B20FE87,it does this by teaching them that you don't always need to get something in return for what you do. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+6142f917ae30,93106B20FE87,"it also can help build self-esteem, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c61cbac250aa,93106B20FE87,because it makes you feel good about helping your town and the people in it ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a79c456920bf,93106B20FE87,it also allows you to pass high school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f6b378a75ae6,93106B20FE87,because there is a required amount of hours of community service to graduate from high school. that is important because if you don't graduate from high school you will never be able to go to college and you won't get a good job to support you and a family. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7d663e7050d8,93106B20FE87,that is why i believe you should be required to perform community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+557f9855f3d2,9329A9DD13F2,"Parents are always looking for new ways to give their student the best education possible, but for some, the options available are not suitable for their student. Distance learning is a possible new option in which students can learn from home using online classes and possible video contact with their teachers ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a60fb39cbf21,9329A9DD13F2,Students should have the option to attend class at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5e4f18a25ed,9329A9DD13F2,it will allow students who are often absent to miss less of the curriculum and allow for easier catch up if work is missed ,Claim,Effective,,,
+32b81577bb5c,9329A9DD13F2,llow students who struggle with social situations to learn and ask questions in a stress-free environment ,Claim,Effective,,,
+325d5a9d4a52,9329A9DD13F2,give students the time they need to learn material or complete certain assignments. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dde0981ed2dd,9329A9DD13F2,Online classes will allow students who have frequent absences to attend class and make up work with more ease ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ef18e4aae077,9329A9DD13F2,"Students miss school for many reasons, such as illness, travel, or family struggles, and each of these possibilities are often unavoidable. Classes at home would allow more flexibility for these students. In all cases, the ability to be at home would also allow these students to work when convenient, whether it is when they are feeling better or they have down time on a trip. Students should still be allowed absences in certain circumstances. If they miss a class, rather than having all of their work piled up and having to schedule time with each teacher, they can do the work from home, not having to worry about the schedules of anyone but themselves. A great example is students with poor immune systems that get sick quite often. Depending on the severity of the illness, students who are home sick could attend classes without the fear of contaminating others or getting exposed to worse germs, and allow them to avoid a place that houses countless bacteria and viruses that could cause an illness at any time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2a205a5d78e7,9329A9DD13F2,"Not only this, but on a day that a sick student stays home from school, they often have periods of feeling better and having more energy, so these periods could be utilized for working on classwork, a luxury that is not available in a school building. If this same student were taking classes at school and missed an assessment in class, they would have to schedule time outside of that class and coordinate to find a time that is available for both them and their teacher to make up the work. However, if this student missed an assessment that was online, they would be able to make it up any time that they are free, not having the restrictions of seven hours of a tight packed schedule or specific times in the day ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48f31d7f1255,9329A9DD13F2,"Distance classes would allow for less absences and missing work, improving the experience of both students and teachers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dea400f97a4c,9329A9DD13F2,Some adults may be concerned that at home learning would deprive students of face to face interaction on a daily basis ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ea72c75b5e8d,9329A9DD13F2,"but for some students, these interactions cause unnecessary stress that hinders their learning ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0e693231f831,9329A9DD13F2,"Anxiety is becoming increasingly more common and that anxiety is often caused by social interactions. For students with such stresses, asking questions in class and asking teachers or fellow students for help is very difficult. The ability to ask such questions online will make them more comfortable and able to learn. If a student is unable to ask a question in class because they fear that they will be judged or make a mistake, they will continue to be confused about whatever it is they had a question about ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ba10caec26a,9329A9DD13F2,"If the class they are taking is online, that student could ask their teacher a question privately, with the ability to edit their phrasing, and get an answer the way they can understand it. Students would not have the everyday interaction of a usual classroom atmosphere, but students that choose at home classes will have greater benefits and can seek connections in a more comfortable setting for them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d21156de4037,9329A9DD13F2,Giving the option of at home classes would allow students to get a more personalized education. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6efa69d8d6c2,9329A9DD13F2,"Every student has a different way of learning, so, many students struggle through classes because they are not being taught the way they learn best. Some students learn best by taking notes, while others learn by doing hands on activities. Some students can hear something once and be able to understand fully, while others take more time to process. At home classes gives students the ability to take the time they need to learn material and complete classwork. One student may only have to listen to a teacher lecture and take little to no notes to understand a topic. Another student may need to listen, take extensive notes, and reread or write their notes in order to gain a fraction of the understanding, but they are not able to do this in class. If the expectation in a class is that you are able to complete an activity after 30 minutes of a teacher talking, but that is not how some students learn, those students will be lost and fall behind the others. With classes at home and online, they would be able to take the time they needed to grasp a topic before moving on to use what they just learned. At home learning allows students to practice the learning style that helps them learn the best. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4f0682a7356,9329A9DD13F2,"Distance learning should be an option for students because they are able to stay on top of their work when they are not at their best, have a learning environment that works well for them, and have the time needed to learn material. Just like any other new way of learning, there are concerns, but the benefits of distance learning greatly outweigh those concerns. This type of learning is only one of the many options for parents and students to choose from in order to get the best education and though it may not be best for some students, that should not take away the option from others. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c624479d3844,9343CC458B7E,"I think that community service is a great thing to do, but should not be required. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+190eb49faf2f,9343CC458B7E,"Some people just aren't that type of people, while others are. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cfe82ff28e5,9343CC458B7E,"You can't force people into something that they don't want to do. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbcee14e1129,9343CC458B7E,Some people might do service with a little motivation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f791573e1cc,9343CC458B7E,"There are many ways you could motivate people to do something, but you need to wonder if whatever you are doing to motivate the people is worth the community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae426e63287b,9343CC458B7E,"Everybody has their own agency or individuality to do whatever they want. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d74399b3fad8,9343CC458B7E,"Some people might choose to but most people at this middle school age put themselves before others.
+
+They just aren't kind enough to put others before themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0ddef63a4f5,9343CC458B7E,"Most people as they get older become more stubborn. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a1d58b4dbe1a,9343CC458B7E,"Once they decide that they don't want to sacrifice themselves for others, it is going to be hard to change their minds. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27aa4016bc11,9343CC458B7E,"In conclusion, community service is a great thing to do, but not many people are willing to sacrifice themselves for others.
+
+It is hard to change the minds of the stubborn people.
+
+Do what you want, but do you think all the resistance will be worth it?
+
+If it is, then do it.
+
+But you could make the resistance less by awarding those who do it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e680ee161d8a,934980B8A79A,In my opinion I think Policy 1 would be the best. Using cell phones in are free time would be better than not using them at all. They should also be off when they are in classes or taking test ,Position,Adequate,,,
+743e1a201d73,934980B8A79A,"Some people like to talk to there friends about what happen over the phone last night and want to show them the text messages. Plus teenagers love to talk to people so when there friend is in another room they can text them what happened in there class. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3d2d2d93e41,934980B8A79A,Not having phones at all in school wouldn't be to good. Some people might have something important to tell there parents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01c3ae78b6ed,934980B8A79A,"Like if they were staying after just send a quick text or call them, rater than having to wait in the office to just say ""I am staying after."" There could also be an emergency like a family member died or things like that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e9892dbfb9f,934980B8A79A,People could also just need to talk to people in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08fbe8cfef52,934980B8A79A,Like asking them if they can have a ride home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65064e0e84d6,934980B8A79A,They also could be talking to someone very important. Like a cousin from another state or someone from a different school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4278e3943fde,934980B8A79A,"I agree with Policy 1. Text in free time, lunch, and at their lockers. A lot of people would love to text people during class. I don't think they should call in class because they could be texting answers to there friends who wasn't in that class yet. That's why there should be off when they are in class. After school would also work to like when they are walking to there bus or to there car. I agree with policy 1. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f64f91c8631b,93BD4F6919DE,"Driverless cars are a thing of the future. They would be very useful especially if they use less fuel than normal taxis, but in stituations where there is dangerous road conditions, like snowing flooding, and high winds, how will the car react? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1de695a0ea41,93BD4F6919DE,"With the weather always chaning will the driverless car be able keep up or will everybody just have to stop what they're doing? The weather influences driving greatly. You have to be able to drive in any condition, thats why driverless car aren't ready. If the driverless car needs someone to take over when theres road work and accidents, the same thing would happen in dangerous driving conditions. The car could not tell that there is ice on the roads. Sometimes cars hydroplane, the smart car would not be albe to right the car but, just spin out and take the impact and put lives in danger. This would increase accidents or even deaths ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+82d0d69e17ce,93BD4F6919DE,"These cars aren't safe to drive in conditions like these. The smart car isn't smart enough to be driving in different types of weather or situations. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+926aedda2f5d,93BD4F6919DE,"The car can't adapt to driving condtions, so would it be able to avoid things like pot holes and animals that run out in front of cars? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f3ad3149a13,93BD4F6919DE,"Pot holes occur every where, if one of these driverless cars hits one a blows a tire the passenger could be stranded. The car couldnt have did anything to avoid the pot hole, so its not to safe. Then there are animals that jump out in front of cars last second or even people. The road is always changing and things are always happening, i dont believe the driverless car will be able to function in certain situations. Sensors can only sense so much that certain times if there is no person in the driver seat things can go wrong. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e25fe2635e98,93BD4F6919DE,There are times in traffic that traffic ligths go out and people have to make decisions. The car can not think to stop at a flashing ready light and then yield to oncoming cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+269952c4ff87,93BD4F6919DE,"There are situations there a person is the best option. Unless the car can think for it self. The drivrless car is too unpredicatable and can put peoples lives in danger. Accidents occur all the time, i don't believe a driverless car can avoid an ongoing accident. Then there are situations with police, or stolen cars. Would the car give away its owner if they were on the run from the police? How would traffic stops work, would the car be so perfect to not break the law? The car could be harboring fugitives or runways or even kidnapped victims. The car wouldnt be smart enought to know, its going to do what its told and drive. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5766b49d2292,93BD4F6919DE,i dont believe that self driving cars are ready for todays society nor will they ever be. The road is alwasy changing and the car would not be able to keep up. ,Position,Effective,,,
+a03b5fc6c5b2,93C0100883BB,Policy 1 is a great idea cause students would be able response to there messages during lunch time and will also be able to use it when they have free time in class ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9b979334e4dc,93C0100883BB,As long as we get to use them when we have free it would be ok for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e9d759f15a1,93C0100883BB,"cause every student usually there cell phone when they are finished with there work or are just very bored. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d494bf7e5b43,93C0100883BB,Lunch time is also a great time for students 2 use there cell phones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83485ec054af,93C0100883BB,cause they aren't doing any work just relaxing with friends and eat talking also catching up with old friends so at that time they can also use there cell phones. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2d2eb44c090,93C0100883BB,Students now a days think its cool to be carrying a cell phone so of course they're gonna be showing it to there friends or giving each other numbers. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d6c990fe72fb,93C0100883BB,Usually they be showing and using them in class when teachers are giving directions and cause of the rules it sometimes gets more tempted to use your self phone. So if you change the rules there's a probability that students mite be using there cell phones at time when teachers aren't giving directions or at times when they have to finish there work before they do anything else. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1033a69427dd,93D2F780054B,"For my perspective on the situation, I am not positive nor negitive. Some of the ideas from bouth the positive and negitive side are good as thay are bad. For what I think is what I will pull from the story to my wrighting. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3561094c3fa9,93D2F780054B,"As example on the positive side, I think the seat vibrating when ready to back into a car is an amazing idea for drivers who need more help when parking. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9d9626c08db,93D2F780054B,"The negitive side on the outher hand, yes we should not have cars that dirve without human control. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+292ce2788ad6,93D2F780054B,Just because we are fecinated on the idea of cars driveing themselvas does not say we should have than. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e2732506063,93D2F780054B,"I will and in from he section it says from television this idea was brought up. If it is from that television is not always right. Especially when it comes to safety. Safety is nouthing to play around with or to toy with. It is a prevention of lot lives and or injeries. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9713d86d3990,93D2F780054B,"The human driver should have their hands, plure on the weel at all times unless thay have finished there driveing route to their destination. Again for the positive the idea for a camera feed from the rearveiw mirror should be in place for driveing and more so parking help. Anouther and lastly for the positive side, the 3-D model of the car's surroundings. It should be there for better and less reckless driveing. Lastly finishing on this selection of text. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+403c4931dde9,93D2F780054B,It says thay need human instruction to get around construction or a reck for safer driveing. We need alert drivers at all times. If thay can not handel that thay should not be allowed permition to these machines. People have lives need to be kept. This is what should be done to keep that and less injeries. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ca97fd73aac0,93D2F780054B,"
+In my conclution we should not have self driveing cars. Parts from the car can be used to help us with our own driveing to prevent a reck. In a sertain situation being it a huge rode blocking or little bump into a parked car. pedestrians could be prevented from harm as well. As I have finished my conclution I shall leave you with this. Would you want to keep youre life from the parts of the cars, or lost from a self driveing car gone out of controll or messed up from bad construction/matinance? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef0b31130e18,94000E9DF26E,I just heard that you are trying to decide on a very big topic. I thought i would wright you a letter to let you know what I think. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8ac209f171e7,94000E9DF26E,I fell that you should require every student to do some sort of community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b992ca6bc4fe,94000E9DF26E,it teaches the kids good live lessons ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e021ca47b579,94000E9DF26E,will make other schools maybe try it to ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f90005015d7,94000E9DF26E,Some kids look at community service as a bad thing. When you think of community service most people would think of picking up trash. Say a student hated picking up trash but for community service made him pick up trash. He would learn form this to mot litter because there are people that go around and pick up trash and now he know what it is like. Another example is say a student helping out at a nursing-home. this student could of not like to be around old people. now he would be able to see that the elders are not that bad. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+8eb77f031869,94000E9DF26E,Can you just think of another school likening the idea you had of making kids do community service. You could inspire other schools to help make their community's a better place. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b14626eeec50,94000E9DF26E,I hope you take the time to read this letter and her what i have to say. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+781452d9404c,942ECB176B3A,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3cf01c9bb161,942ECB176B3A,The winner take all system in each state candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. Focusing only on tight races in the swing states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b9ea09b1bd8,942ECB176B3A,"During 2000 campaign,seventeen states did not get to witness they're candidates. Including Rhode island and South Carolina. Voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single ad. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d8653d79f6b2,942ECB176B3A,State senator we need to get rid of Electoral College and upgrade to popular vote. It's just not fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68d1f2b13c41,942ECB176B3A,That's not very perfessional at all. what's the point of having electoral college if they do not show up. Thats a horrible look for not just you but them too. Either yall need to get a understanding or move on up to popular voting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a13d4ccb2550,942ECB176B3A,I have a question. When citizens vote in electoral college why do their votes go straight to the candidates and not the president? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4b0369284022,942ECB176B3A,Sound very fishy if you ask me. This is about the president of our country and it's not being taken seriously. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8331a786538a,942ECB176B3A,"See with the popular vote they go straight to the president and not a scam like eletoral vote. It's more confidental if your really serious about your president. Now what if the wrong president get picked? Then what? High bills,going up on gas,harder to get hired.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5a31587ebf21,9447D5C6EA03,"The development of a new, self-driving car that functions efficiently is being tested by various different companies, like Google and General Motors, but what practical purpose would this development solve? Some argue that these smart cars would increase traffic efficiency and could facilitate a new age of safe motor vehicles. Others argue that we cannot place our trust regarding safety solely in a machine. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a54d53f3dde5,9447D5C6EA03,"The creation of driverless cars should not be further developed, despite potential increase in safety, due to the increased dependency on technology it would facilitate, as well as liability issues regarding crashes or other potential accidents, both of which could negatively impact other aspects of the future. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+5c0045117c3d,9447D5C6EA03,"Despite the issues of liability and dependency on technology, the development of new cars could potentially reduce safety risks associated with full human control over vehicles. Because ""the information from the sensors [of the driverless cars] can cause the car to apply brakes... allow a far better response and control than a human could manage,"" driverless cars may reduce potential for crashes of other incidents. Advanced sensor technology is indeed an asset to this new development ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+fb7556563e15,9447D5C6EA03,"however taking this concept while maintaining human control could prove to be more benenficial, due to the lack of issues such as liability and also keeping humans active and engaged. The problem is that most people would nate place full trust in technology, thus eliminating the purpose of a ""driverless car"" being completely driverless. Ultimately, this potential asset is far outweighed by the costs of producing driverless cars. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+2fecbe212b3f,9447D5C6EA03,"Younger generations of people in our modern world are becoming increasingly attuned to smart technology,with developments such as the smartphone, smart watch, etc. spreading throughout the nation. The introduction of a driverless car would further stimulate this already existing dependency, which could lead to problems down the road. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f7a258d8c62f,9447D5C6EA03,"As of right now, ""...none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless."" This means that someone must always be in the driver seat to ensure safety when the situation requires them to take over. This, however, contradicts the purpose of the ""driverless car."" In addition, because the point of these cars is to drive safely without human control, people could have this in mind while in a driverless car. As a result they may give little regard to the road, and rely on the car to keep them safe and get them to their destination. Then, if they are not prepared for an alert or a need for human assistance, because they expected the car to handle it, their dependency on the car put their safety at risk. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+00f8be0c47ed,9447D5C6EA03,"The liability issues if such an accident were to occur could be tremendous. If there was an accident, the question would arise, "" who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?"" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c1f84f852203,9447D5C6EA03,"This could lead to court trials and lawsuits that would either harm the consumers in the auto industry, or the producers. Either way, the costs would have an increasingly negative impact on the economy. It would not be logical to assume that these cars would be one hundred percent safe, as there is alway room for error, and ""presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver..."" Because many people refuse to place full trust in technology that could have potential flaws, if an accident were to occur, the industry of self-driving cars would likely crash, as people would more and more see this technology as danger, and place the blame on the auto industry. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b7220409623,9447D5C6EA03,"If further developments were to be made so that these cars truly don't need a driver, while it may reduce safety risks, ultimately the costs regarding user dependency and liability would outweigh benefits. Increased dependency could actually create more safetly problems, and liability issues could result is a crash of the auto industry's smart technology branch. If the concept of this Driverless car were changed to, rather than have no driver, help the driver, then the outcome may be more beneficial. If people still drove the car, but with helpful alerts, warnings, or displays, traffic safety would go up, and the liability and dependency issues would be lessened or dissolved altogether. A new age of technological innovation is here, and utilizing this idea in this moderate waycould pave the road to a brighter future. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+94a3d7e734bc,944FCD948396,I don't think that you should not change the school policy. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38bd293f4867,944FCD948396,"I think that people work hard enough to get into sports already.
+
+Getting a B average can be difficult.
+
+Students need time to practice sports too.
+
+I agree that students need to have good grades to play sports.
+
+Part of the reason is because most students right now would not be able to play because they have a C average. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0da5241747f7,944FCD948396,I think most students should be allowed to get a couple of C' s because it is a passing grade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c363f732420,944FCD948396,"What if sport players don't understand one class but do ok in other classes that's not fair to them.
+
+Players will also think that if they cant play because they don't have a good enough grade average they might think that they are letting people down. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c81e68a116ba,944FCD948396,"All students have been talking about this.
+
+Some students are better at sports than school work.
+
+Maybe you will consider that changing the school policy will be a bad idea.
+
+You may think different But i hope you will change your mind.
+
+If students cant play any sports than who will represent us in the school?
+
+If students did not write you, you should take some time and ask them what they think.
+
+I hope you can clearly see the other side to this now. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b29f783c8da,945820293694,My argument for the development of these cars is against it because i do not agree with some stuff such as the cars driving its self. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fb9ac9707555,945820293694,If a car drives it's self then it would be no fun for people who have cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+803614d50569,945820293694,This development is crazy because it will change many things. We should keep cars the way they are instead of changing them to something different that not everyone would like. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+363a19c73c53,945820293694,Many cars are already having many problems so why make a car that can drive its self? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d72e818eac8a,945820293694,"We should fix the problems in todays cars instead of worrying about trying to bring something new. People are putting to much in cars, such as sensors and computer hardware. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e45f1d5bf02,945820293694,These things might help ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+adddd291d4d0,945820293694,but they could also fail at any time and turn into a bad situation. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+72bbbc1ee65d,945820293694,"However it could be a good idea to always add safety things to the car, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b8d420ba27ad,945820293694,but not everything can be sure to always work. Anything can fail at anytime. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c6efab243e15,945820293694,Technology is really advanced! ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8e345e0f146,945820293694,Everyday people are working on something new because of how well technology is. If technology keeps on advanving people will make more things and come out with incredible things. Many of these things won't be safe. People have to think in the safety of theres and others ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5bb950155432,945820293694,It is not a great idea If you let a car do everything for you because that could be dangerous. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+df7e931f85a2,945820293694,You should be able to control the car whenever you want . Imagine if you come to a stop sign and the car doesn't stop? that could seriously cause a problem. Somebody could get hit and that will not turn out good. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4071eb2fe39f,945820293694,"Other cars like BMW's and Gm have developed mny different things for cars. In the article for example says a BMW has a ""Traffic Jam Assistant"" whitch means the car can handle driving funtions at speeds up to 25 mph. What if the car was to stop working and keep going and not being able to stop? what would happen ? Nothing good would. GM has developed driver's seats to vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. What if you trust this vibrator and you wait till it vibrates to stop backing up and the vibrator fails and you hit something? that could be dangerous. You could back into a kid or person and run them over. You could also hit an object and damage your car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75940b8b2a8e,945820293694,That's why i am stating my opinion on why i am against the development of these cars. We should stay with what we have until we are 100% sure about things. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+07b573a0a548,945CCBB52DED,The Electorial College is something in the United States that needs to be replaced. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+daba2ea57078,945CCBB52DED,It is an irrational system that takes the people's power to vote away from them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+78647644a11c,945CCBB52DED,The system has flaws that leave the possibility of disaster open to happen ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ae73b3f9928,945CCBB52DED,"It takes the power to choose the goverment officials from the people, and gives it to a group of people who can vote either way ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+81fed3f96b29,945CCBB52DED,"The Electorial College is a way to choose the Presidential canidate who wins the election. It involves a slate of electors (according to Source 2) who cast their votes in. The people in each state vote for the winning electors of that state. The electors pledge to a canidate and thats what people vote for. Once the people choose a winning elector group they go to Congress and cast their votes in for who they want, and that person then gets so many votes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7edcfb28e926,945CCBB52DED,"The problem is that the electors aren't required to vote for who they said they would, so if the elector suddenly decided to change his mind after he or she won, the people's votes are basically invalidated and a different elector gets the votes ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6062814778b7,945CCBB52DED,"This effectively removes the people from the equation in who gets elected. All an elector would have to do is win over the people, then he or she could just change their minds and cast a different vote than what they said they were going to do. The people who vote don't even vote for the Presidential canidate in this system, they vote for a bunch of electors that they hope will vote for what they said ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+392f3994d255,945CCBB52DED,"This is not an irrational, unrealized fear. It has actually happened before. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+abf0926145ed,945CCBB52DED,"According to Source 3, in the 2000 election, Al Gore had a majority of popular votes, but less electorial votes, so he lost to Bush. This isn't even the first time it has happened, it has happened previous times throughout U.S. history. This is a clear example of how flawwed the Electorial College system. Between the possibility of the people's votes not counting for anything, and that they don't even actually vote for their preffered canidate, this system needs to be replaced ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c761f960823,945CCBB52DED,Some may argue that the chance of an elector not casting his or her vote that he pledged to is very slim ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+56bbd0e1162d,945CCBB52DED,Why would you even be ok with taking such a chance? It's better to be one-hundred percent sure of what will happen instead of ninety-five percent ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+acbaf774d433,945CCBB52DED,"Also, since most states in the U.S. award electorial votes by a winner-takes-all basis (according to Source 3), if one side of the votes wins, even by a slim margin, they get all the votes ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef6d1fc78d29,945CCBB52DED,"This seems unfair, since if they won by a slim margin at least some of the state thinks it should be a different vote ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c03ae91f859,945CCBB52DED,"It would make more sense if the states awarded both sides of the vote if it was a close win for one side or the other, but they would award the true winner with more votes than the narrow loser ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c1d1697bb916,945CCBB52DED,Another problem with the E.C. system is that states that are largely of one belief ( Republican or Democrat ect. ) have no real reason to pay attention to the opposite side of the canidacy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a299fe71f86d,945CCBB52DED,"Since the state would be largely one thing or the other, it is irrelivant if thirty percent of the state votes one way if seventy percent of the state votes the other, since the landslide victory style of electorial vote giving is present in most states. This also means that states that are biased and small states get almost no exposure from the opposite side of the canidacy because they know they have almost no chance of winning their votes. This seems to force the voters to choose one canidate's electors because they don't know enough about the other ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c7764c92f05,945CCBB52DED,"In conclusion, the Electorial College needs to be replaced with a more fair, balanced system. It has the potential to allow the electors to defy the will of the people who voted them in, invalidating the people's votes and making them pointless. It also has candates only focusing their ads and visits on the states with more votes and the states biased towards their party. Finally, it has almost all the states have a landslide ""winner-takes_all"" style of awarding electorial votes. This means if one side of electors only wins by a slim margin, the other side gets nothing, even though since they lost by a small number they clearly have a sizeable amount of voters for them. The Electorial College needs to be removed before someone takes advantage of it's serious flaws and takes the votes of the people and makes them useless.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+36e2449e19cc,945DC098A326,I overheard that you are thinking on should we keep the electoral college or not use it any more. the electoral college is the amount of popoltaion  a state has. the distrct of columbia has only 3 beacause its not a state . ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b68981c46d1a,945DC098A326,"n my opinino i think its stupid that you have to vote on the population , aka a president cant just have a state like florida or ct just have a state like florida or cali ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f86fd10030ce,945DC098A326,now its true that the presidental election is very important  but it shouldint have to be taken like this . the presidents always pick the states with the most population or points. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0649e774f3d,945DC098A326,yes i think that the electoral college is useless maybe in a draw or something. but the vote should count for everyone no matter what state there in. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e5312697ea1a,945DC098A326,the state is not the points the people are ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0533c82f22f6,945DC098A326,most states dont have any campanie ads any where cuz they know that they dont hav e much points .other parties like green party and the tea party they should be more out htere the just demo anf rep ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a00923f23371,945DC098A326,the elector college is widely know as a non-democratic way to vote for presidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e4a0000bed3,945DC098A326,othere parties are imoprtant to like the green party is one of the best ones im my opionio but they have that winner take all system. t most people diagree with the system in place but they cant do nothing. larger states get more attention then the smaller states because the president needs more points . the states not might be bigger in size but population may be bigger . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ab71e7d5bf23,94B72A7C1E6B,"Ever since our founding fathers established in the constitution that the president and vice president votes were determined by electoral college, the founding fathers made a good decision. Electoral College is a process where electors gather for a meeting and count the electoral votes to determine the new president and vice president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1bc2395665c4,94B72A7C1E6B,The United States should keep Electoral College to determine the president and vice president rather than a popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9ea811aac3f8,94B72A7C1E6B,"Electoral College avoids run-off elections, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6eccbecd483e,94B72A7C1E6B,Electoral College is more fair than a popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f53d982e2cec,94B72A7C1E6B,"To start off, Electoral College should continue to determine the president and vice president voting rather than popular votes because electoral college avoids run-off elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+42c800cbb418,94B72A7C1E6B,"If somebody was running for either president or vice president and they recieved thirty percent in popular votes, nobody would know if the person with thirty percent popular vote would win the election. Electoral College prevents confusion by producing a clear winner. For example, in source 3, the text reads ""Richard Nixon in 1968 and Bill Clinton in 1992 had only forty-three percent of popular votes but both had three-hundred and plus electoral votes which made them win the election"". The president and vice president make sure our country is running well and that we as a country have no problems. If we were to determine our president and vice president by a popular vote, whoever could kiss up more to the voters would win the election even if the person running doesn't meet up to the qualifacations of the person they are running against. Avoiding a run-off election is very important because no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+06370f9e0233,94B72A7C1E6B,"Also, if a popular vote was how the president and vice president were decided, not as much people would pay attention to voting ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+00fd05f8f446,94B72A7C1E6B,because voters have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign of the people running for president and vice president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc2363a34b2f,94B72A7C1E6B,"Furthermore, Electoral College should continue to determine the president and vice president voting rather than a popular vote because Electoral College is more fair than a popular vote ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f2f0ad5e54a,94B72A7C1E6B,"In 2008 when Barack Obama won his election to become the 44th president of the United States, he didn't win by being the popular canadite, Obama won by his passion to make this country better than it already is. For example, in source 1, the text reads ""The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electorial votes is required to elect the president"". That way of electing the president is more fair than a popular vote because you need 270 electors to say yes to make you president rather than people making you president by if your popular or not. Electoral College is what keeps our elections fair. There is no other way to elect somebody president becuase no other method will be this successful than Electoral College. After all, Electoral College has been the way to elect the president since the constitution was created. Popular Voting is a bad method if were used to determine the president and vice president because somebody who is running for president can manipulate people to think he or she is a good canidate for president when they really aren't. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87485f6ecc16,94B72A7C1E6B,"To conclude, Electoral College should continue to decide the president rather than popular votes becuase Electoral College avoids run-off elections, and Electoral College is more fair than popular votes. Why should we change the way we elect president if this method has been working for over 200 years? Electoral College should continue to decide the presidency for years to come because it works so well. That's why Electoral College will stay as the way to elect the president. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+29b3eea0b4fb,94EFC5F3ABB2,"Changing the electoral college would not be an great idea due to the fact that it has been around for centuries and would negatively impact the voting system. Some believe the voting system is a very unfair and outdated system because of the electoral college. When changing the system to popular vote it will affect many people, it may also come out worse than the electoral college. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c84f36b3b4d9,94EFC5F3ABB2,3 big points why the electoral college should stay the same ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2d3472e2afb4,94EFC5F3ABB2,because the electoral college has been around keeping voting in place for centuries ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fce83d0a8f5,94EFC5F3ABB2,The second great point is that a disaster only happend once ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11dd2527f131,94EFC5F3ABB2,Then the third main point is the winner take all idea is a great idea for the electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abd04d4df261,94EFC5F3ABB2,The electoral college has been around forever so why change it now ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e0c6d3ee268,94EFC5F3ABB2,Some belive that the electoral college is a good idea Because of the voting way in the electoral college system voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors. which is good because people need to have a leader of there state and that leader shows them which president is really good for whta they do. Presidents talk about what they are gonna do to help the country and the slate elelctors define what the presidents are gonna do to help out that certain state. Then the people of the state vote there slate electors for good reasons. The electoral system should stay around alot longer the system is just rigt for voting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+406099872ea9,94EFC5F3ABB2,The electoral  college is in good shape for staying and not changing a disater only happend once 14 years ago back in 2000 ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50a7f2775f53,94EFC5F3ABB2,That means at least  3 elections happend since then and nothing went wrong ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ea8c4ffef40,94EFC5F3ABB2,Even though if the electoral college system is such a good system then why was there such confusion in th200 fiasco. That makes the electoral college system look very bad becuase it can keep it's voting in balance at all. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9ce933396221,94EFC5F3ABB2,"This was only once, If the system changes then this could happen more than many more times. Then soon we won't even know which president wins the election. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2f6e9b7ec907,94EFC5F3ABB2,"The electoral college looks really good due to the ""winner-take-all""
+
+system which awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e94b3a12191b,94EFC5F3ABB2,"some say this is far but others believe the ""proportional representatin"" system, the system that the state governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment"", which list all the canidates who ran for president in the state along with the names of there respective electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+292f3cfda9d2,94EFC5F3ABB2,"In overall the eletoral college should stay due to the fact that the electoral college has been around keeping voting in place for centuries, a disaster only happend once and finally is the winner take all idea is a great idea for the electoral college.  so let's not try new stuff keep the electoral college. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7a6fdfd11f5,94FE94B27DCD,"I believe our school should have community service.
+
+Why ?
+
+Because, students should not litter on school property and make our school look trashy.
+
+School is a place to learn not to litter and destroy the schools ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8d4554304d9c,94FE94B27DCD,"In SCHOOL_NAME, the population of litter is huge.
+
+Students here think after using an object and its time to dispose it, it belongs on the ground.
+
+All students at SCHOOL_NAME
+
+should take part and help.
+
+Making our school look better will be a big helping hand. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2f525bec51c,94FE94B27DCD,By that I want to totally help to clean up our school ! ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+788b7db08e1e,94FE94B27DCD,"I would first make a survey. Post it out in each hallway in the school.
+
+Then I would have every student to sign yes if they think its a good idea to have community service or no.
+
+With the following students that has pick yes I will call a meeting.
+
+Next I would ask them what days are good to stay after school and clean or can they come everyday.
+
+The students that will not take part of this act I would make another community service.
+
+Our school looks horrible especially the break areas.
+
+Also the court yard of the school pavement need to be refill with concrete.
+
+The school walls, classrooms, and hallways need to be repainted.
+
+The graffiti on the hallways wall and outside the school building walls need to be painted over. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3d0e33ce7f4,94FE94B27DCD,"With this all said and done, Principle TEACHER_NAME I have may reasons why you should require school community service. First I believe our school should have community service because it looks trashy not classy.
+
+Second because students think trash belongs on the ground. My third reason is because inside the school building needs repainting.
+
+Most all ,all students should take part in this act to make our school look like a school not a public park !     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b88c3b37b89a,951BF63BC21A,"The landform on Mars is quite interesting, and there could be many thoughts on how it came to be. With already known knowledge and knowledge that is soon to come, people like to guess ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7af24cea2dd9,951BF63BC21A,"With the already known knowledge, we know so far that aliens have not been found on Mars yet, therefore they couldn't have possibly made a mark. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+745dd72500ac,951BF63BC21A,"Like Earth, Mars is a planet just with different features. Our earth forms mountains and hills due to erosion and our plate tectonics. It's naturaly formed by the planet. No living organism created the rocky mountains ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3d1a149c13a6,951BF63BC21A,it is able to be assumed that Mars can form it's own hills and mountains as well. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8844a4a87440,951BF63BC21A,Something else that is credible is that no life form has been found on Mars yet. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd8c97abe6b7,951BF63BC21A,Who knows if Mars has erosion or layers under it's surface that is able to move? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3891ca9cd2bb,951BF63BC21A,"If these markings were to be made by some kind of living organism, we almost certainly would know about it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7215187c79b5,951BF63BC21A,"Especialy with all of the high technology we have today, we would be able to see any kind of life. Maybe if we explored undernethe the surface of Mars, then we could get more information to see if Mars could have created it or if these aliens are living undernethe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c8ef99f8e1e,951BF63BC21A,"It's a great way to assume how it happened by comparing Mars to Earth, but it could also be irrelevent. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3f99a8c5b1e1,951BF63BC21A,"Earth, unlike Mars, has an atmosphere. It keeps in heat, but changes. Earth also has water and life. If this were to be a cause of the rocks, hills, and mountains, then it could be said that the face on Mars was not created by erosion, water, or anything like that ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1bbc4ab37f59,951BF63BC21A,"It takes a lot of studing and even more knowledge to figure it out, but aliens don't seem to be logical quite yet. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+650cad21283d,957C84D3B1F0,I think that we should change the electoral collage because is it not very organize ,Position,Adequate,,,
+884254b82857,957C84D3B1F0,and theirs slot of voters that dont like it also in the electoral college you just dont vote for the president that you want for your nation you sre also for slays that you might not even want or like it should just be that you vote for the president that you want to represent your nation. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4843cf510c0,957C84D3B1F0,The electoral college has a major arguemnt against it electoral college. is what we might call the disaster. factor ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e415905a54a,957C84D3B1F0,"the american people should consider them selves lucky that the 200 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. the system also allows the legislatures and they defy that shouldnt be like that they should let the people pick 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1087b278214,957C84D3B1F0,". In the eleltoral college they could be a a tie and thru popularity the presendent wins faster and theirs no tie and people dont have to worry about a tie also the electoral collage is unfair to voters because of the winner takes all the system in each state thats not  fair to the voters very unfair.
+
+The electoral college has been notice to be unfair also is outdated and irrational the best agrguemnt in favor of the electoral college are mostly assertions with out basis in reality and the arguments against direct election are spurious at best that y people dont whant the electoral collage no more it should  be abolish ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c20e3e601dd4,957C84D3B1F0,The electoral collage should be taken down it is not fair at all and voters dont want the electoral college. because it is being unfair to them and i agree with them . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9ccf5831d77,957C84D3B1F0,Also in the electoral collage theirs been many mistakes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e55ab448d0e,957C84D3B1F0,like when vice president richard nixon.  who was presiding over the seanate validated only his opponents elelcectors thats not right or fair he made sure to do so with out establishing a precedent what if it happens again the nations doseant need that . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e6e4b3a470d0,957C84D3B1F0,Voters in the electoral college they get confuse and they canot control for whom their voting for ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a2685e352858,957C84D3B1F0,and sometimes they get confused that they vote for the wrong candidate the electoral college is not organize and is no good.                                                                                                 ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ecbdacea19d3,95874BE012EB,"The planet, Cydonia was discoved to have a face-shaped figure that stretched two miles long! Although some people believe that alien-life or some life-form has occurred or is still occurring to this day. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9047c566e3d2,95874BE012EB,I believe that the face figure is just another natural formed landmass like several we have on earth ,Position,Adequate,,,
+813f4cc46586,95874BE012EB,For instance the Middle Butte found in the Snake River Plain of Idaho has a lava dome which takes form of a messa. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3dc40c6f1a4c,95874BE012EB,"In paragraph eleven of ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"", Garvin says, ""As a thumbs rule, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger then the pixel size, So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what there were! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8556fb20a955,95874BE012EB,"This explains that there is no way of showing or providing any evidence of aliens or lifeform on Mars. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9959bc92e115,95874BE012EB,"The author also mentions that Garvin says, ""It;s not easy to target Cydonia. In fact, it's hard work."" In this paragraph nine it also consentrates about the angle it is looked apon. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e60766f73162,95874BE012EB,"I feel like if it was hard to find the perfect angle and measurements to take a closer look at the face, there could have been mistakes made without realization. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7de3dbf5e75a,95874BE012EB,Even though no one knows whether or not if there was or life on Mars or if there still is. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d15b409215c1,95874BE012EB,"The likelyhood of this theory is very low. There would have to be a water supply, nutrients to feed off of, sunlight, shelter, etc. for any living organisms to survive ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+680aff89652b,95874BE012EB,"Everyone should be allowed to have their own beliefs, but sometimes people believe in things that are hardly believeable. This could help save time and convience for in the future whenever NASA finds solid evidence that there is no evidence of aliens on planet Mars. Even if NASA would like the fundings for finding existance of lifeform, it would also be a great discovery that there isn't because they could narrow the list of safe planets us ,humans, could live on if there was any kind of diaster to happen to our planet.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+257809d206e3,95A6F680F078,i foundly belive that we should be able to keep the Electoral Collage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e2abcbfadf2e,95A6F680F078,because it has haelped this far with fairness and making sure that all the votes have been counted at least twice. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8a8eb06e6115,95A6F680F078,But i also see that from where you stand the Electral Collage may be just a waste of money and in some peoples eyes it is. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d45a33cc66df,95A6F680F078,but that doesnt mean that in alls it is ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f8bcd287c088,95A6F680F078,from where is see it if it helps us why  not keep it even if it doesnt always pan out as planed we all have our problems but that doesnt mean that the government shuts us down it just means that the only reason we have those isssues are because not everything will go according to plan. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5161bd1373ef,95A6F680F078,it also doesnt mean let it get outta hand then try to real it in as soon as possible the only way this would work is if we had some one who didnt care who won eaither way so long as eveything is fair and not messed with. so what im trying to get at is that we dont always get our way but that doesnt mean we need to shut down the Electoral Collage. According to the 23 amendment the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for puposes of Electoral Collage. also Richard nixion and Jimmy Carter Bob Dole have agreed on the electoral collage and there not alone. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0a36d541328e,95AF46110F14,For the longest time electoral votes have been apart of the process of voting the government pulls certain people side and they cast their own vote of who they think should be president and the rules state that if theirs a tie between to presidents that the person who wins will be based on the electoral votes. Over the years we have had many wise presidents and other times we haven't. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+77583eb5ce9a,95AF46110F14,The state senator should consider changing election to popular vote for the president of the united states ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2a549252ad95,95AF46110F14,because its the peoples choice ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83ec1c3e4f2b,95AF46110F14,its more safe route. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ede76083424,95AF46110F14,"the electoral vote is a process, in quote number two it states ""what have richard nixon,jimmy carter,bob dole, the U.S. Chamber of commmerce,and the AFL-CIO all,in their time agree on answer: abolishing the electoral colleg! their not alone; according to a gullup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al gore thanks to th quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but lost the presidency, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb6927434a10,95AF46110F14,over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a08933c5f89,95AF46110F14,"in the past decade certain presidents hae been caught doing wrong lieing, and being cheats. when those presidents get impeached the people feel robbed of something,their clarity. this quote is stating the facts that people like to win even presidents they'll do just about anything to get what they want some presidents will do speeches, work their absolute hardest and others wont. presidents and runner ups are very well educated men very wealthy some how they get in contact with the electoral college and they bribe them in anyway shape and form its heartbreaking. there are about 270 electoral votes that are required to elect the president, and the electoral college consists of 538 tons of people that have different mind set then other some that may be rascist, sexist and etc. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da768a27839c,95AF46110F14,"In the law system their are many people involved in whats going on they have lots of power. In source number two it states ""segregationalists in lousiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with new electors who would oppose john F. kennedy."" people want to have their president ruling over the united states at all cost and they see the electoral votes as  a way to get a foot through the door into making that happen, people assume that since everyone is equal now and that racisim dosent exist and its happening till this day. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64a8672efd14,95AF46110F14,it will be a much more safer route if the senator would get rid of the electoral college all together. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1f07ed16d71,95AF46110F14,"secondly, getting rid of the electoral college would benefit the entire world ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+48636632cad4,95AF46110F14,"because this nation called the united sates is a democracy it is ruled for the people and by the people, when the government descides to go by the electoral college votes thats not ruling by the people because our nation dosent only consists of 538 electors we each have our own voices. we consists of 50 states all together if the government cant conduct electoral colleges in each state then it shouldnt be around in the first, we the people all have different opinions and outlooks on the universe it shouldnt only be counted for about 538 electors it unfair. and god knows where the electoral colleges are held and if they are being completely fair to everyone their are their all ethnicities from all over the nation, is it normal people that have nine to five jobs so they understand the struggles of an average person making 60,000 dollars a year, or are they picking business men and housewives that live in suburben neighborhoods. The nation have been completely blind sided by these things its just a scapegoat on picking the right president in their eyes and not in the peoples eyes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a20ad69e8f6,95AF46110F14,"In conclusion,the electoral college wasnt ever ran by the people or was for the people, our founding fathers had great intentions of making these laws and rules work but in reality it was a way simpler time back then the world has evolved in so many ways with different invetions and iphones,and tablets,and internet some of the constitution laws need to be review and really regulate what needs to be kept and what needs to go. the electoral college was a good idea back in the 18th century but now people have found a loop hole to make things go their way and it isnt fair. it needs to be reconstructed in a way that its unbreakable ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f2f133bb94cf,95CB51270760,Honestly I think they shouldn't change the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+68dd3a2346e7,95CB51270760,"This Electoral College has made this nation historical, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4aebfc4762e6,95CB51270760,too much work to change it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e4f821ffb9b,95CB51270760,it wouldn't be the same if they changed it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5b338b6381c,95CB51270760,"We had so many presidents that changed this nation. George Washington was probably the most remembered president. Washington fought for our country in wars that happened long ago. He made this country have so much meaning to it. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff716993324b,95CB51270760,It would seem very tiring to change the Electoral College. There are so many rules and amendments that they would have to change. They would also have to change the number of votes that the president has to get. I think it would be better if they left the Electoral College the way it is. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3daec6241a79,95CB51270760,There are so many great Amendments that should remain the same. It would be chaos if they changed the Amendments. Plus a lot of people would have even more opinions about why they changed the Electoral College ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc55ee8eafaf,95CB51270760,The Electoral College should remain the same.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+569921e99775,96141BA9C7BA,"For years, people have been telling others that the natural landform on Mars is actually a face created by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0a0a03b090c5,96141BA9C7BA,I as a scientist believe that it is also a landform coinencidently in the shape of a face. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f9ddad1624c0,96141BA9C7BA,We have tried multiple times to photograph this landform and have succeeded. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c7e47dd2c7e,96141BA9C7BA,"It appears to majority of us, that it is not more than a natural landform. We have took many precautions into making sure that it isn't an alien artifact. For example, it's like the man on the moon. It just happened to be there naturally and created itself over time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6282fef72f6,96141BA9C7BA,"You are of course entitled to your own opinion, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+06e71c9f6cf2,96141BA9C7BA,but that doesn't make it a fact. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+75b953c7bd57,96141BA9C7BA,"In conclusion to this theory, it is not more than just a theory. We are not hiding anything from the world. Something like this I'm sure we'd be more than happy to share with the rest of the world in our amzing findings. We could be wrong, that is so. But, we're pretty positive it's just a landmass. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cd60dd4ac8a7,961D937626F7,"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+75896a62d321,961D937626F7,I think the best way to know who wins the election is by the majority votes to the candidate. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+e3f79236ad0b,961D937626F7,"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4870eb194cfb,961D937626F7,"The voting system should be done like specificly, because if you setup different things it's not going to work at all. It depends what kind of setups you are making. But I think it's not the good way to make voting system in setups. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+47a05c48def3,961D937626F7,"Each candidate running for president in our state has his or her own of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilties are.
+
+Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The singal best argument against theelectoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky for the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the sysytem allows for much worse. Consider that state allows for much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.
+
+Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the elecrtoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of the Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Because each state casts only one vote, the singal representative from Wyoming, representating 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the representative from California. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for Congress, the House's seletion can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. And if an electoral tie seems unlikely, consider this: In 1968, a shift of just 41,971 votes would have occured if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way. The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.
+
+It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say thsi, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college!
+
+The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite, such as Romney was in the South, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral; votes by increasing his plurity in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable resuly because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be succesful president. The residents of the other regions are likely to fell disenfranchised-to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president.
+
+It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope for carrying their state-Democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicians in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by the popular vote. But of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and in spite of that, about one-half the eligible American population did vote in election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2d3c2132bb3,961D937626F7,"My only suggestion is to do the votes through the majority voters to the candidate because any kind of setups are not going to work. And the people are not likely going to believe all that stuff. It's kind of hard to do that but, it will going to work.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c374adb46d3d,96A010A50052,"How many times a day do we talk on a phone or cell phone? Cell Phones have become a part of everyday life in the USA, so why does that need to change at school? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a19017ad9da4,96A010A50052,I believe that at school we should be aloud to use our cell phones during lunch and other free time as long as they are off during class time. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ad27d756524b,96A010A50052,"My first reason is we can talk to our parents. If you let your parents know your lunch time during the day, they can call or text with information you may need. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d8d4deba4f4,96A010A50052,"A second reason is that it does not disturb or harass or learning environment, so why shouldn't it be aloud? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+be180285806c,96A010A50052,"Lastly, it is a way to chat with friends at other schools who are also at lunch. In this time period, cell phones are a major way to keep in contact with those who do not live in the same state or town as you. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2e2a771b27c9,96A010A50052,"What do we do if an after school activity is canceled and we don't have a ride home? Are they supposed to walk home and freeze? During lunch we can let our parents know that our after school activity has been canceled and instead of walking home they can pick us up. Also, we can let our parents know what time our lunch is so they can call or text us if they need to let us know our pick up spot has changed or if they might be a little late picking us up from school ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+60d6d16974d6,96A010A50052,Letting us have cell phone during lunch could turn out to be very beneficial for parents and students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9827447b4ac0,96A010A50052,"Lunchtime is a time to relax and refresh ourselves for the second part of the day. We talk to friends, eat, and rest from all the information we have gathered in the beginning of the day. Why would a cell phone change that? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a9ddb907795,96A010A50052,"Cell phones do not make any difference in a lunch time setting. They do not disturb anyone around us, and they do not harass the learning environment. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5e46d4acb21f,96A010A50052,"Kids are smart, if you let us have time on our cell phones we wouldn't use them in class and that would lesson the discipline rate for texting during class. Did you know that 1 out of 3 kids that own a cell phone text during school, breaking school policies? If we were allowed to use our cell phones that rate would go down dramatically. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5df3c0ce0fd3,96A010A50052,"How do we talk to people who live in other towns or go to another school? Most teens will call or text them from a cell phone. If a friend from another school or town is at lunch at the same time as you, it is a good time to text them and have a small chat. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0abdeb359dad,96A010A50052,"A teenagers social life is very important to them. Facebook, Twitter, and cell phones are the number one way we keep in contact with each other. Giving us time during our day to talk to eachother and keep in contact is very important to us. We know that during class is not the time, so if you give us time during lunch to chat we would also be quieter during classes, which would make our teachers happier. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea43da4dd5e8,96A010A50052,"In conclusion, kids need time to talk. Giving us that time during the day could not only help you but it could help us. We could talk to our parents and solve small problems. We could enjoy our free time a little bit more. Finally, we could talk to other friends and just have a good time in general. That is why i think the cell phone policy should change so we can use our cell phones during class and free times. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cd6b63e3a0e4,96B8F7A4DAB9,"Hi, this is one of a student from the SCHOOL_NAME. I am writing this letter to talk about the policies our school is having. The policy that i will be talking about is the cell phone policy. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4c1fa663c689,96B8F7A4DAB9,"I think our school should allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, but as long as the phones are turned off during class time ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f6af00ec0a14,96B8F7A4DAB9,"Because we have busy students, their parents will be calling them to inform them on what they should do. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd759af5f5dd,96B8F7A4DAB9,"I agree, sometimes students do get carried of with their phones ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f039668ed8fc,96B8F7A4DAB9,"But some students don't have phones, so don't think to hard about this ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e7bc5e35d056,96B8F7A4DAB9,"Students do want to text with their friends, and they can because sometimes school gets boring, but I think that instead of focusing on what to do with the phones, you should focus on what to do with the classes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b964a4c2b062,96B8F7A4DAB9,"The reason students text during class is because the class isn't interesting enough. What I noticed is that more people text in the ""boring"" classes then in the ""fun"" classes. You don't need to confiscate the phones, let the students keep them, but if the classes are better, then the rate of students using phones will decrease. Also if the work is to hard, students might text some answers to each other, so don't make the work to hard either ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa8f6d42c946,96B8F7A4DAB9,"I'm just saying, its your decision. I also use phones, and I love to text, but sometimes play games or text other people when i get bored and sometimes I get texts from my friends asking me what the answers are to a problem or something like that. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+71cf2ddc68b9,96BF2953ED8F,I believe that the way our elections are run are not what is best for the United States. The Electoral College is changing the way that we originally set out to vote and is making things unfair for the citizens who vote. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+4d5f39392cd0,96BF2953ED8F,"I propose that the Electoral College is taken away all together in order for elections to be more fair, and more like the original intention of the U.S. ",Position,Effective,,,
+9239a649a7a3,96BF2953ED8F,"With most states following the winner takes all idea, the winner of the general public may not be the candidate that wins the elections. These times are rare, but they happened before there is nothing that is stopping them from happening again. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a5a1254060dc,96BF2953ED8F,"A lot of voters who are not very well educated may not even understand what the electoral college is or what they are actually voting for when they vote. Instead of voting for the candidate that they want as the next president, they are voting for a group of electors that decide who will win. Sometimes, the electors that are assigned to that candiadate will not vote for them. This process also seems to disriciminate against the less populated states because they don't have as much a say in the college and are often forgoten in the rush of propaganda and aren't really aware of who they should pick and why they should pick them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+24ec6bf2b086,96BF2953ED8F,"In The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradfor Plumer, Plumer explains that one of the best arguments against the Electoral College is that the rate of disaster is so high. In 2000, there was a elctoral crisis based upoun the Electoral College, because Al Gore recieved more individual votes, but George W. Bush still won the election. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+47aa3b461066,96BF2953ED8F,Another reason that this process is so unstable is the way that it makes voters feel about voting ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f95f00d53088,96BF2953ED8F,"In large states, where this a majority of either republican or democrats, voters may think that if they are in the minority, and the other party will surely win the election, what's the point of voting. If there was no Electoral College, the votes that they put in could contribute to the greater pool of that parties voters, while with Electoral College the votes are pointless and basically disapear. That, to me, is robbing the citizens of the U.S. of thir right to vote. According to Richard A. Posner, the Electoral College restores some of the weight that the large states hold in a presidental election. However, the large states may not have all of one party and those other votes can really make a difference. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+268b25b52f66,96BF2953ED8F,Some argue that a few votes can not do a lot and that the Electoral College is a far more organized way to conduct the voting. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+42338b21c97c,96BF2953ED8F,"But every vote counts, and if every voter understood why they were voting for who they were voting for then the president may be a majority favorite ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+262ede909efa,96BF2953ED8F,"It seems unfair that the president of the United States, the most important man in the country, is not truely picked by the voters, but by the Elctoral College. The Office of the Federal Register says that the electors that are selected are chosen by the candidates political party but that stae laws differ on how they are specifically selected. This way does not seem like the best way of performing the task and I can see how it results in issues. Trusting the weight of the United Stated on the the backs iof only 538 electors is not the most stable way to perform an election. Why trust a select group with this descion if the whole United States can contribute to it ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f3d62c7b6d1c,96BF2953ED8F,I think that it is criticall that we change the idea of an Electoral College to the idea that all of the people in the United States are able to contribute equally to who should be the next president based on what they believe is right ,Claim,Effective,,,
+10d03a6eecb2,96BF2953ED8F,"Bradford Plummer believes that one of the most worrying thoughts is that there will be a tie with the electors. If that were to occur the elction would fall into the hands of the House of Representitives, resulting in all the states, no matter what their population is, having the same amount of votes, casuing a president that may be very far away than what the majority of the United States actually wants. This may seem unlikely but in fact there have already been many close calls. In 1968, only 41,971 votes would have deadlockes the election. In 1976 a tie would have happened if 5,559 voters in Hawaii, and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way (The Indefensibel Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, by Bradofrd Plummer.) A tie may occur and if it does, A lot of citizens would be very upset that the president did not win by popularity, but by the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+518b407bf76f,96BF2953ED8F,"There are many reasons that the Elctoral College is unfair to the voters of the U.S. State inequality, diaster, ties, and people loosing the urge to vote. The list goes on and on and if this doesn't make you see what is wrong with this system than I don't know what will. I hope you take this information to good use and use it to tear down this unfair system once and for all. If we really want to be a democracy, than we have to do away with this system. Many of Americans believe that this is the best way and several have published interesting papers on that topic that may chaneg the minds of people who are still for it. I hope this dream to get rid of the unfair and terrible system that is the Electoral College is accomplished soon. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+037b1b6003f1,970171A0AC8E,Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b4b830e8cafa,970171A0AC8E,I don't believe home schooling benefits ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d5db1c7dc8d3,970171A0AC8E,because there is still a lot of distractions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c701a7bf4a87,970171A0AC8E,it could cause laziness ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f69955f0089,970171A0AC8E,and irresponsibility ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+174c6f512f22,970171A0AC8E,Many people believe home schooling is a way better option then being at school because it creates more of a comfortable environment for the students ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0c161b6d29fa,970171A0AC8E,"However, they don't think of all the things that are at home that could potentially be a big distractions for the students. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9c526a2e354a,970171A0AC8E,"For example, my friend Generic_Name tore his ACL and could not come to school for four months he was being home schooled and he said he would get very tempted to use his phone more then usual and was having a hard time focusing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e33cd9ce370,970171A0AC8E,"Another negative affect this could have on a student is laziness, he or she could get so used to having everything available at their hands they could have a harder time adjusting to everything else. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+72ff362f9aa3,970171A0AC8E,"For example , Generic_Name had broken her arm and had to get home schooled until she was better so she could come back to school. After she had healed her mind had gotten so adjusted to home schooling she got so lazy and it made it so much harder to come back to school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f585006f4dae,970171A0AC8E,"Meanwhile, many people say it is the best thing to do ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+fd37a0938977,970171A0AC8E,Getting home schooled could cause irresponsibility because it now changes the person to do things at their own time then having to be responsible and get things turned in at the right time and on time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5979f69d94bb,970171A0AC8E,"For example, at a job you are required to check in at the time of the schedule handed to you not when you are ready and feel like it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+88982ed1c66c,970171A0AC8E,"In conclusion, home schooling has more negative effects then positive and I encourage you to not use this form of easier education. Therefore, homeschooling can cause a lot of distractions , laziness and irresponsibility. All students should get the proper education that they need.                            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5de7313b4f8a,970A1848B187,Twenty five years ago NASA Viking 1 spacecraft was looking for somwhere to land on Mars for Viking 2 when it sppoted a showdow that looked like a face. The enoemous head was nearly two miles from end to end. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+dc90e173a4ff,970A1848B187,The facewas just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+afeace49efe8,970A1848B187,"Only few scientists believe the Face was an alien artifact. But the article states that when NASA unvieled the image for all to see, the caption that went with it noted a "" huge rock formation... which resembled a human head... formed by shadows giving an illution of eyes, nose, and mouth."" Also in the article it says the author even reasoned ""it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention on mars"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+297df7e6cdff,970A1848B187,The fact that when the face appeared on the Jet Propultion Lab monitors was short lived also proves that it wasn't a alien ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f4cde1cab832,970A1848B187,because if it was they would have probably started doing test and research on it right away or if not right away then soon. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9af78fd30a25,970A1848B187,"On April5, 1998, when Mars GlobalSurveyor flew over it for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team took ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ee5b283b0d4,970A1848B187,"a picture ten times sharpper than the orginal photo revealed it was just a natural landform. There was no alien monument. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b24f792dab8a,970A1848B187,Of course not everyone was happy. It's much cooler to have it be a alien artifact than a natural landform. People weren't giving up. The face is located 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter of April 98' when the camera on bored of MGS had to peer through clouds to see the face. Skeptics said the alein markings were hidden by haze. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6797df3bdee7,970A1848B187,"Mission controlers prepared to look again. The article states that ""we just don't pass over the face very often"".
+
+On April 8, 2001, it was acloundless summer day; the Mars Global Surveyer drew close enough for a second look. In the image things were three times bigger than the Vikings one so you could easily see if there were shacks or small airplanes. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6ddc012e51dc,970A1848B187,What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. These are landforms common around the American West. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9e0dc73e84e,970A1848B187,"This all proves that the so called ""Face on mars"" was just a landform and not from alien artifacts. The shadows from the landforms made it appear to look like a face but it was just a cauincedince. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1f36de87f301,9715D8D6F842,"I think that the idea of driverless cars are a good idea, but I don't think they are necessary at all. They are pointless and cars should be driven manually. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a8bde6e91ccf,9715D8D6F842,"The idea of a safer car is too ensure the safety of passengers, drivers , and even pedestrians. Accidents are always going to happen, but it is up to drivers themselves to make this happen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3656a0e4af17,9715D8D6F842,A good opposition to the idea of driverless cars is the psychological aspect. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9.734438233E+018,9715D8D6F842,"In the passage, it says, ""psychological aspects are really a challenge,"" and they should be. There is no point in having a driverless car that still needs the assistance of a human driver. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b7b3715589f9,9715D8D6F842,"Also, we aren't really saving gas amounts. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8e290489ce1,9715D8D6F842,The driverless cars are still going to require gasoline as fuel. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de780b182ce0,9715D8D6F842,"In conclusion, driverless cars are not worth the investment. They will still need human assistance and drivers will be bored waiting for their turn to drive. The amount of gas needed will still be the same to power all the cars. This is why driverless cars are pointless. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+32f2616702b1,971D0C1C75F0,I completely disagree with your proposed policy change that if passed would not allow students to participate in sports or other activities unless they have a B minimum average. This policy would be unfair to students. ,Position,Effective,,,
+373cef2880f2,971D0C1C75F0,It is unacceptable because sports or other activities besides academics are valuable to students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a0768ee7f1db,971D0C1C75F0,"Activities that are not academic related, such as arts and crafts, music, sports, etc. are mandatory in school because school is not just a learning environment for academics and non-academic activities may help students' performance in academic subjects. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a6f613c09db,971D0C1C75F0,"Non-academic activities are important in school because children need to be stimulated in all areas, not just academics. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d496e838a837,971D0C1C75F0,"If school didn't have music, sports, etc., then students would not be able to exercise their other talents, unless they had opportunities to do so outside of school. School is a place where students grow, and if students are only growing in an academic area, then they are not fully maturing. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5975972623a0,971D0C1C75F0,Non-academic activities are also required because those activities can help improve students' performance in academics. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c9479cccbd48,971D0C1C75F0,"For example, if a child had a sports elective before his final math exam, he could use the sport to distract himself from being nervous. Once he got to his next class, he was not nervous, and he did well on his test. Performing non-scholastic activities can help performance in scholastic activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9668cae6e9e7,971D0C1C75F0,"Overall, Principal, you cannot put this policy in place. It would contradict the purpose of school, and it may degrade the academic performance of students. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4e7717e262a4,9780A12FCE0D,I was informed that you are deciding whether to require all student to perform community service. I wanted to take the opportunity to talk to you about what i think about this situation. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f42aff4ba42a,9780A12FCE0D,i think that everyone should be required to do community service at least once a week. ,Position,Effective,,,
+b924f8429a16,9780A12FCE0D,"i believe that with at least one day that each student does it, it will help the school and our community. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f499580c7d73,9780A12FCE0D,If you approve of this our school will become cleaner and our library will become more organized and the kids from the elementary school would really appreciate if we could lend them a hand. If we all could participate in this program our student will think twice about throwing a piece of wrapper on the floor. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+27e979ccff37,9780A12FCE0D,Most student disagree with me because they say that it isn't their responsibility to pick up after someone else. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+bdaf776f14c3,9780A12FCE0D,They also say that they don't get anything out of performing community service ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc26b5e0329a,9780A12FCE0D,"but i think that if each student does community service that maybe we could raffle a prize out every month or so, so that they could get motivated to do the service. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b3720fb1b4a1,9780A12FCE0D,"Or maybe for every two hour they do of community service they could get a hour of detention taken off.
+
+I think that with my proposition our student will want to participate in our weekly community service program. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e8b453ea484d,9780A12FCE0D,"I hope that you make the correct decision, that is best for the school, the district and our community. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+511f05b41c6b,97A158DCC4BF,One day in the lab two people were arguing over the face of the natural landform. Tthe one said spacecraft normally looks straight down. Alien markings were hidden by a haze. A surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down. mars golobal surveyor drew close enough for a second look. The face on mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude were it was winter in april 98 a cloudy time of year on the red planet. The camera on board had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. malin team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras absolute maximum resolution. As a rule of thumb you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size he added. There were objects in this picture like airplans on the ground or egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks you could see what they were. each one finly decided on the ones dicesion. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d296f64d1402,97A5F803C874,"Are driverless cars really coming? I don't think so. Driverless cars stiil need a driver, they might not even start, or work properly, and the driverless cars will surely bring the number of deaths due to a car accident up ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7b61ea22a460,97A5F803C874,"Who wants one now? I don't want to be around one nor do I want anyone to drive these ""driverless"" cars. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+89ad32d4e8a7,97A5F803C874,"The driverless cars, aren't even close to driving themselves, they still need to have the driver's attention ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a7d445c54efe,97A5F803C874,"Driverless cars, should be as the title states, cars that are driverless. These cars, will give you warnings when it is going to need you to take control again. The author states, ""In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when theroad ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents."" If these cars were really driverless, they wouldn't need a driver to help them navigate. Are these cars really driverless? No. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7cbc12178e43,97A5F803C874,"Are these cars going to run on gas or electricity? Either way, these cars not start. A car stalls all the time, but those cars we handle, but what about cars that are driverless? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f169523afe5a,97A5F803C874,Would we know how to fix it or would we have to spend hundreds to get it fixed? These cars will cost hundreds to get fixed over and over again. Who wants to do that? I wouldn't mind having to charge it but then my electricity bill will be over the top expensive. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ca652c643545,97A5F803C874,Would our kids be safe to be in the cars? What happens if our kids are playing and the car starts and the kid gets hurt or even dies? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71022511cc3e,97A5F803C874,"Would it be your fault or the car producers? It woul be everyone's. Ours, for not protecting our kids well enough and the car producers because they didn't think of the children. The number of deaths per year of children due to car accidents are already high, add in a car that might start by itself and run by itself, will increase the number greatly. I wouldn't want my kids near it. Neither should you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7531b2cecc4d,97A5F803C874,"
+Knowing these facts, do you still want one? Do you want a car that was supposed to be driverless, but you would still need to drive it, or a car that might not even work, or even a car that could possibly kill your kid? I don't. These cars are dangerous, no matter how safe they say it should be. My position on the driverless cars will always be no. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37241d607d7d,97B417D0B9D9,"Dear,Florida I think that we should keep the Electoral College becuase it keeps the number of votes and it produces a clear winner. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3f08c733d9fd,97B417D0B9D9,The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the senate decreed in the constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+faf25201d4c0,97B417D0B9D9,The Electoral College is a process that consists of 538 electors. Each state equals the number of members in the house of representives. The Electoral also select what their responsibilities are. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+327d7b6ea91d,97B417D0B9D9,The Electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism a non-democratic method. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8c9a25558c13,97B417D0B9D9,"The Electoral College is also a mordern sense. Also no region (south,northeast,etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. Residents also feel that their votes dont get counted that the new president will have no regard for thier interest, that he really isnt their president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+952ac7a9acf8,97B417D0B9D9,Electoral College alson avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the vote cast.   ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4e94b458c67,97DD2D770B03,I have decided to express my opinon to you about the Electoral College process for electing the President of the United States. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+81eef3c3dd62,97DD2D770B03,"This process should be abolished as soon as possible for it is corrosive to the American peoples opinon. We should instead switch to a popular vote by eligble American citizens to decide presidency. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+f822f031e7c4,97DD2D770B03,Now some fellows might argue that the Electoral College is favored by the people. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+211f1cdabb5c,97DD2D770B03,"When in fact, as Bradford Plumer points out in paragraph 9, ""60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now"". ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fa3f8382719e,97DD2D770B03,"Some people may also say that the Electoral college ecourages the president to visit all states, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1800f4f05586,97DD2D770B03,when in fact smaller states still are not treated the same as states with more electoral votes. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+81f58e2aae69,97DD2D770B03,"A president would rather spend their time investing and giving information to a state such as Californa who have 55 electoral votes, who feel more inclined to think about their decision due to their involvement, rather than a state with 3 electoral votes who dont invest as much thought into their votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8c3cd6588b5f,97DD2D770B03,"In grade school we are taught that popualer votes most accurately represent what a specific population wants, why dont we use it in the real world? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a609ff3a02c1,97DD2D770B03,"If your princible wanted to figure out what color the students wanted their yearbooks, she would not elect people to decide for each class! In the Bush and Gore election, Bush recived less votes by the American people but won presidency because he accuired more Electoral votes than Gore. That means that more American people wanted Gore, but the fate was chosen by 271 people, who selected Bush as the winner! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4f5a753b0ff6,97DD2D770B03,The Electoral College also increases the risk of a tie ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9c16e20747f5,97DD2D770B03,"if one occured, the election would be disrupted by the unorderly process of which we would have to take to decide the president. In 1968, a change of votes from just 41,971 people would have tied the electoral votes due to the even number of 538 Electors. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cbb7d7c56fb2,97DD2D770B03,"The overall idea im trying to express is that the Electoral College is a poor way to show peoples opinon, and much rather focuses on that of 270 individuals who in the end, decide the President of the United States. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bc81bdc4832d,980850873AB7,I think that you should give us community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e31e4500560,980850873AB7,because we don't want to live in a dirty community. We also don't want viruses. If we keep this community clean then maybe a lot of people won't be sick and live longer. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6e805ed0e32d,980850873AB7,We should also have more tutors because we want the kids to have a better life and not be poor in the streets. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5257d9b39a7f,980850873AB7,ome people don't have they right mind to learn and they need a little help and we could do that. We could also help tutor special ed kids it might be frustrating but i bet we could still do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2af221cd417a,980850873AB7,"The environment helps us by giving us air to breathe i think it's time to give back to the earth. Yes, it might take too much time away but we are doing it for a good reason and it is to live in a healthier, better community. They could do all they want during the weekends but it is better to help now while we can than to later on when we can't do anything about it. Also people that have asthma would help clean up the community because they don't want to get another asthma attack because people are polluting the air. If some people don't want to do community service that's fine because sooner or later they will regret it. We want people that have some kind of sickness to go outside and enjoy themselves. Most people that are sick or have heart conditions have to stay inside their home because it's too dangerous for them to go outside because we don't help keep the community clean and they might get an infection. When we go to school we should clean up after ourselves. Since people don't do that i think that they should do community service. I know everybody could do something even though if it's little it can still help out the community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f4b0d9933ef,980850873AB7,Just incase more people choose to not do community service I think that the people who do want to do community service should still have a chance to help out. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9db6c59558d5,980850873AB7,Someday someone might thank them for helping out. I think people who are sick would really appreciate what we are trying to do for them. Also pets could catch diseases that are in the air. When we leave food behind it creates maggots and maggots find a way to get into your house and when you at least expect it somehow they will end up in your body and start eating your flesh that's why we have to pick up after ourselves. Also when we go to school some people leave the food on the tables and it creates flies and mouse's and we don't want to a cafeteria that has animals that are infected with rabies or some other diseases. And I think that's why we should have community service. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d4f3493022ad,985A02A10642,I truly believe that not all students should be apart of community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a952fc7bf94b,985A02A10642,"My first reason is that some kids do want to help their community and make it a better place, but some kids have a lot to of stuff to do and can't really fit that in ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+abe3378f5ae7,985A02A10642,My second reason is that most kids are just plain lazy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e600c18abc51,985A02A10642,Don't want to do anything with there lives or do something for their community. So it really would be a waste of time trying to make students go and do community service because all they is going to do is just sit there and complain or just don't come ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87bd0e1cb09b,985A02A10642,I think that you should have kids decide on going to do community service. and decide what time is good for them to go and do it! ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+cd0b7b1bd2f5,9888F16554D5,"Driverless cars are coming, no matter how much you may like it. They have their many pros and cons, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a7a3f4895969,9888F16554D5,"they still need to be driven by a human to get in and out of a driveway, or to navigate a crash or roadblock, and how it went over 500,000 miles without crashing (paragraph two). This still fairly remarkably, even whilst it is still in it's prototype stage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eeafa947c042,9888F16554D5,"Although still proving to be an expensive alternative to normal cars, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b75d78b7a82,9888F16554D5,"driverless cars can have the potential to be an incredibly safe method of transportation, as compared to human driven cars. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+734d3989a694,9888F16554D5,"They can be proven even safer to both pedestrians and policeman alike, by being utilized by people under the influence of alcohol, to drive home safley, and not harm any people utilizing the sidewalk or other drivers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f11574315956,9888F16554D5,"Although having to be driven by humans to do things like drive into driveways or navigate traffic, which would ultimatley void my previous statement on how it could protect passersby. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f3fb549dea70,9888F16554D5,"Remember that these cars are still in the prototype stage of their lives, and developers are still working hard on making these cars as skilled as a driver as any human. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+460a059facee,9888F16554D5,"These cars are coming closer and closer to becoming a reality that could be in every house by 2020. Much like everything else, they have their pros, and cons, but ultimatley prove that ve are one step closer to a better, safer tomorrow. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0038144f43b3,9893E88CAE61,Dear principal I think policy number 1 is better than policy number 2 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+02783da56f0e,9893E88CAE61,"My reason are that maybe the person forgot to bring something he or she needed to bring to school or to class. The other thing that could happen is that the person does not feel good and wants to go home. The other thing that could happen is that the person got dirty or fell in the mud and he or she does not have extra cloth to put on. The other thing that could happen is that the person has to stay after school because he or she did something bad or did not do the homework. The other reason is that they play in a sport or stay after school but the coach or the person that stay after school had a to do something and left early . My other reason could be that the person forgot to bring a book for a class and they need it. The other reason is that the person does not have money and they need money to buy something they need , or they need money to get in train . My other reason is that the parent needs to sign a field trip slip so he or she could go to the field trip. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+477878cbd4ea,9893E88CAE61,"
+Those were my reason why is policy 1 is better than policy number 2. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fd224bf13f48,98A2AD61198B,Everyday students wake up and go to school only for them to feel dragged down and stressed out about everything school entails. Online school counteracts this stereotypical version of school by allowing kids to do more ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c60db5fd58bf,98A2AD61198B,Students will benefit from being able to attend school online ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f7d80a97a56c,98A2AD61198B,"they will be able to create a more personalized education, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0818a07b1285,98A2AD61198B,allow for more free time to explore things outside of the academic world ,Claim,Effective,,,
+53f1a9c49602,98A2AD61198B,the change in environment will lead to a better mental health for these students. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6297a27b50d9,98A2AD61198B,One of the biggest benefits of online school is that it lets students work at their own pace rather than having them stay on pace with everyone else ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a79408c341d9,98A2AD61198B,"This allows for the kids to get a personalized education that fits best with how they learn. If one kid needs more practice, they are able to practice while another kid may be ready to move onto the next. This way the one that is moving on isn't being held back by the kid who might want a little more time on a unit or topic. Students create their own education plan which is also good for the teacher because sometimes it may not be easy, in a classroom setting, to spot when a kid needs a little more attention and work on a topic because they have to move as a group to finish all the units before a final or AP exam. Personalized education through online classes would allow for kids to finish everything before these exams but still learn the way they see best fit. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea8218af16d0,98A2AD61198B,"Because students are able to work at their own pace, they also are given more free time than in school education accounts for. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+521e666222a8,98A2AD61198B,"This free time is also beneficial to students as it is an opportunity for them to explore career choices and other things that interest them. Free time gives these students a chance to be involved in the community more through different things such as volunteering, having a job, working for an internship, and so much more. For example, one online student I know likes to volunteer at the animal shelter when she can because she wants to become a veterinarian. Her free time allows for her to learn more information and develop the skills for what she wants in the future. It sets kids up for success rather than failure by allowing them to find interests in high school rather than switching subjects every year in college. This free time lets them create a more lasting impact on their community while also finding out more about the real world and what it hold for students when they graduate. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a653e25714a6,98A2AD61198B,"
+Finally, one of the most important parts of online learning, students are able to build better mental health with the change in environment ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12ea19b2d5df,98A2AD61198B,"Mental health is one of the biggest issues for teenagers in today's society. Many students feel trapped in school where they have nowhere to go and malice is inevitable. Students feel stressed, anxious, and depressed from traditional school which leads to their mental health deteriorating. But through online school, students will have a more open environment where they choose who is in and out of their life, so they are no longer forced to be around the people that hurt their mental health. It will decrease in mental health issues but it also allows for more time to be spent with the people they love and care about, which in turn builds their mental health up. Schools force kids to be with one another even if the none of them want to be there. Online school solves this by letting kids have more freedom with the social aspect of their life and do what they feel is best for their mental health. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+85ddd5658db7,98A2AD61198B,"In conclusion, students will greatly benefit from online school because it will let them make more out of their life than sitting in a building for 7 hours a day. Students can create an education plan that fits them better, explore what they world has to offer, and build better mental health while they do online school. Now the question is, will society progress for all students to attend online school or will they be stuck in their ways of conventional schooling? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7837a9284503,98FD2BF096A9,"Do you want a messed up system to control who is voted for president, or would you want to vote for who becomes president? In my favor, I would choose the most popular vote for president. In my defense people should vote for president and not have higher ranked people vote for president. To be clear with you, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bfa116e040de,98FD2BF096A9,"The Electoral College should not be used. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+092b2414378f,98FD2BF096A9,"Would you want to vote for who becomes president?
+
+I would love to vote for who would become president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f2c1cc832e0,98FD2BF096A9,"Why would you let people that do not live the life you live vote for you, you need to vote for who you think will be a great president for you. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e32135f311c8,98FD2BF096A9,"For EX.
+
+I'm living in a retirement home and I cant pay for my dentures I would need to vote for a president that allows charity for retirement homes. different people need different presidents we all can't have a different president so we all need one that we all agree on. people living in the white house do not know what we want so why would you want them to vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c6f7b1db3af,98FD2BF096A9,voting for president is more reasonable. to me thats what i say.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f4f14c0a361b,99037D0468C8,"I understand how you feel about community service, and I too agree it is very important. But some students have things to do like baby-sit for their parents or extra- curricular activities and sports. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a9467a0dfc94,99037D0468C8,I do not think community service should be required but it can be an extra-curricular activity ,Position,Effective,,,
+dba275273117,99037D0468C8,"I think you should consider the idea, and take in the fact that students have other important things to do ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19cbb02404b8,99037D0468C8,"Jobs of some sort, or helping their parents out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+812b643e6a3d,99037D0468C8,I also think it could be a punishment for students who misbehave ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b0dbf84436e4,99037D0468C8,"I mean, who wants to pick up someone else's trash, its gross I think. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fcede470f2dd,99037D0468C8,And students who choose not to pick up trash on their free time shouldn't have to be forced to did it ,Claim,Effective,,,
+38cd87edaebb,99037D0468C8,"If they want to pick up trash, it should be because they want to and not because they have to ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+85fd7825c15f,992AD0F505B0,I would like to argue that we should change to doing the election by popular votes not by the Electoral College. It is unfair to but the pressure of picking the right candidate on the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5309566f0743,992AD0F505B0,We should just let it be by popular votes because it wold not be that hard to find out which states had the most popular candidate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a50cf42c1ff2,992AD0F505B0,It would be harder to let the Electoral College pick the candidates. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7888400c7c84,992AD0F505B0,For starters some people might want to know what to Electoral College is and they might want to send you a letter about it and what would you say? Something along the lines like they are the ones who pick the votes for the candidates? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e5531dff0fd,992AD0F505B0,"This is what I got out of
+
+Source 1: What Is the Electoral College?
+
+"" The Electoral College is a process, not a place."" Some people might not understand that. It also states that it consists of selections of all the electors, it is also a meeting place for the electors to vote for the President and the Vice President, and it also used for counting of the electoral votes made by the Congress. At the Electoral College also consists of 538 electors and the majority of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the President. Every candidate that is running for President in your state has their own group of electors. They are usally generally chosen the candidaate's party. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0970ae666d5f,992AD0F505B0,"In
+
+Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best- laid defenses of the system are wrong.
+
+They want to abolish the College becaus eit is unfair to the people that want to vote for their own candidate's and not have some college do it for them. In that source it states this ""They're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks to the quirks of the Electoral College..."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c02f362c993,992AD0F505B0,"This is what is wrong with the College ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce9c1646b3c5,992AD0F505B0,"Yes, I know that there are people that think that it is ok for the Electoral College to do all the voting. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3d8d11053b8a,992AD0F505B0,To me I like it if you all would let it be the popular vote not by some college. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+384e8d781f4c,992AD0F505B0,"Yes, I know that sometime it might do easier to use the college and that is ok, but I would like it if it was all about the popular votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff8cc8dd232c,992AD0F505B0,Also I like to argue that you should abolish the Electoral College. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c388984244a,9976385A501C,"The electoral college,they decide what we vote on based on what they think our state would choose for president. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8397f0a308e3,9976385A501C,"To me the country has it all wrong, I think we as US citizens should let our votes decide on who should be president. Even though things may get done quicker I think everyones voice should be heard. ",Position,Effective,,,
+66586d3a44b7,9976385A501C,People like Bob Dole Jimmy Carter and Richard Nixon have tried to get rid of the electoral college. Plus the electoral college cost Al Gore his presidency would've also liked to have their voices heard in the 2000 election. and im pretty sure people would agree with me the 60% of the population of voters would like their voice to be heard. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10ba924599ef,9976385A501C,The electoral college has a weird way of how they run and choose. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81145f72e746,9976385A501C,"Like the example in ""whats wrong with the electoral college"" it saiys that ""if someone lived in Texas and they wanted to vote for John Kerry you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to John Kerry and then John Kerry would have 34 electoral votes.""  If it were based on popular vote the points would be split to the person based on the number of votes they got. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d3e0af68f8d,9976385A501C,"Even though other situations like in 2012 when obama won the election he recived a 61% of the electoral college's votes while the popular votes he recived was 51% a 10% difference, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9038132be4fc,9976385A501C,even though he still would've won it would've been more fair to let the popular votes decide ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6e4e9409039e,9976385A501C,"Some say its best to have a bias voter choose because they wont choose someone based on what everyone else's opinion is, like how the south favored romney over obama ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8a47a88092e6,9976385A501C,but to me that could be bad beacause what if who we choose actually has good ideas the college wouldve just go for the other guy. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a319cbfd6272,9976385A501C,"The ""winner-take-all"" method happens in swing states like Florida,us and other states have a big part on who we choose to run our country we usually pay attention to all the debates and campaings because we think our leader should know what he's doing swing states and big states are places a presidential campaign would take place the like to ensure they get their votes where it counts to guarentee a lead. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+294c8ab47ecf,9976385A501C,the electoral college doesnt go to good for people who dont agree to their sides view ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c2ae31164b7e,9976385A501C,"like ""republicans in California or democrats in Texas"" their voices arent heard the popular votes might've gotten some points to save their canidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+034cf822804f,9976385A501C,in conclusion the electoral college is blocking the right to vote for who we want and have their voices heard even if that person were a republican in California. the popular vote should have some say on who will run the country. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9171c12d9189,997D5145CB33,The natural landform was not made by any kind of alien in Mars. It is just a landform that appended to look like a human face. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ef4b8c1a3df6,997D5145CB33,And if im saying if it was made by aliens there is nothing that proves it to be made by aliens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+485ae68a3c91,997D5145CB33,"there isnt any at proves or gives an idea that aliens actually exist. But there is a lot of evidence that proves that the face was made naturally and is just a landform that happened to look like one. A few of them are we sent ""Mars Global Suveyor"" and it showed no sign of alien monument, there was a good picture taken of the area of the landform, and lastly if there was any signs of aliens or their artifacts we would want to know and explore it like you would ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51dc39e85c5c,997D5145CB33,"First, when we sent the
+
+"" Mars Global Surveyor"" it arrived in eghteen years in September 1997. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8888e05f19fc,997D5145CB33,When the Surveyor was flyiing over Mars it found the face and as soon at it was clear we took pictures of it. On April 1998 the Surveyor flew over and took a nice shot at the face. This shot was ten times better the the first shot taken. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38f87cff3ede,997D5145CB33,"secont, Thanks to the picture taken by the surveyor we could now look for small details by the face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3136a3b0373b,997D5145CB33,"For each pixel in the 2001 the image spans ""1.56 meters that compared to 43 meters per pixel."" in the picture you can look three times closer thanks to pixels. That means that if take a picture like that you should be ablie to see big objects for example airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small homes or shacks. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b75019a87d6e,997D5145CB33,You might say that we NASA are trying to keep things secret from all of you in the publice and that we just want to keep the discovery of aliens to our selfs ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eddc43f6aea8,997D5145CB33,But the truth is we don't we want you to know everything we know and we want to find any sign of alien life like artifacts and shacks and technology ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e91f8c2f0e8c,997D5145CB33,but the fact is that the face in Mars has no prove theres nothing by the face that proves that any type of life built it. there was no left over material or any tools left the simple fact is that the face was made naturally and it is a landform like the ones we have on earth. Just this landform happened to look like us like a human. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70189bb5a2a6,997D5145CB33,"In conlusion the face on
+
+Mars will and should be considered a landfom. If it was made by aliens we would have found out thanks to all these studys but all of the studys we have made have proven there to be no life on the planet Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+25e278ba5629,998B12C291DD,I agree that you should change the school policy so that students should have a B average in order to participate in school activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+02dae3e66c58,998B12C291DD,I think that it would be a nice change to help students get better grades. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8c6b6ebc2f01,998B12C291DD,"It would also help our school to be a better, smarter school ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7d0fc2a405ae,998B12C291DD,"Students would also push themselves so they won't have to face being kicked off their team. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d563996d1bb,998B12C291DD,If students do not already have a B average then how can they keep up their grades when they are participating in activities? Students need to learn to organize their time between activities and schoolwork. So not only will they learn to organize their time better but they would also be getting better grades. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7370ddc91c00,998B12C291DD,If you change the policy then many students will be willing to push themselves for better grades so they can participate in school activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f2061bd85322,998B12C291DD,"The students who are very dedicated to the sport or activity that they love would definitely push themselves for better grades. I believe that some of the students who participate in the activities at our school do not have a B average. Most likely because they are so dedicated to their sport that they forget about the schoolwork. If one of these students found out that you are changing the rule then they would change their attitude towards school so that they will not get kicked off their team. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dfa2af48a4cd,998B12C291DD,Our school would be a smarted school if all the students participating in school activities all had B averages ,Claim,Effective,,,
+849702007d7a,998B12C291DD,There are a lot of students in our school's activities so if all of them had at least a B average that would be very impressive. We would not only be smart but look smart to other schools. Parent would want to send their children to out school. That would be pretty awesome. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a93318073560,998B12C291DD,"I think it would be best if you changed the school policy to where all students need a B average in order to participate in sports. It could really help out our school and out students. Most kids will be doing better in school and would be better at organization. We could also change out schools image to other parents, kids, and schools. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c8a85034df2a,99C687C4B554,"Society is no longer in the era of the stereotypical paper and pencil. New advancements in technology offer a wide variety of options for a student's education. With internet, there are limitless opportunities as far as how and where a student needs to be in order to get a proper education. Home-schooling is a new trend that is gaining more popularity throughout the world each and every day. Other than the people that would be in a school, this system provides the students with all of the necessities that a student would have access to as if they were in a school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bc654e2e681c,99C687C4B554,"Although some may believe home-schooling is a superior alternative, the motivation and socialization that would be present in a classroom would be nonexistent at home. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0e7dc079eeeb,99C687C4B554,"Motivation is a trait that many young adults need more of, whether it is waking up on time for class, or not procrastinating on a school project. Waking up early is something nearly everyone will have to do in their lifetime, so it is better to get used to it while you're still young. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+25a108dba859,99C687C4B554,"If a student has been home-schooled their whole adolescent life, waking up early will be something that they struggle with as an adult. Procrastination is something that many students have a hard time avoiding during the school year. The root of procrastination is a lack of motivation. Part of a teacher's job is to keep the students on task and make sure that they are completing everything in a timely manner. Home-schooled students do not have the availability of a teacher to motivate them and make sure that they are doing their work. It is all up to them if they want to stay on task or fall behind. If no one is there telling the students what to do, they will struggle to find the motivation within themselves. As well as teachers, peers also help to encourage their fellow classmates to stay focused. This leads into the next topic of socialization. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9655125ca4bc,99C687C4B554,High school is a period in one's life where they should enjoy their youthfulness while still working hard in school. It is important to balance the two out as they are equally as important. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f2fc2392b9e9,99C687C4B554,"A school is the central point of socialization, whether it is working together to complete an assignment, or just conversing during your lunch break. Many long lasting relationships are established within a school environment. Home-schooled students cannot relate to in-school students in this sense. Not only is it important to form friendships, but it is also important to get comfortable around large crowds of people. Talking to people is an inevitable fate in everyone's life, this might be giving a presentation at work or publicly speaking in college. While it is a burden to most, starting earlier in life will provide more confidence for when you need it later in life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+accd26fa36dd,99C687C4B554,"
+There are many valid reasons that support the practice of home-schooling. For example, students with social anxiety will be better off in the comforts of home. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+af0054000bcc,99C687C4B554,"Students might get anxious around a large crowd for many reasons. For one, self conscious people might get anxious because they think that people are judging them for their appearance. Others might have a hard time building up enough confidence to voice their opinion in front of numerous people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5a5003876706,99C687C4B554,"While home-schooling would eliminate the fear of social anxiety, I believe that it is better to face it and get used to it, rather than hide from it. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cb7976d4acba,99C687C4B554,"Another reason to argue for home-schooling is because of reduced stress. Some may say that the levels of stress will be greatly reduced in the comfort of home without the constant distraction of other students and the demands placed on students by teachers. While this partially might be true, more stress is caused when a student does not know how to manage their time wisely. Home-schooled students are at a greater risk for this because their are also many distractions at home such as cell phones and social media. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+13635f025638,99C687C4B554,"Many things are taught in school other than just math, science, history, and language arts. School teaches many important life values that teens will need for when they are an independent adult. Some of these values are impossible for home-schooled students to learn, simply because it is a different environment. Although the idea of home-schooling sounds like the most beneficial option, many people do not realize that home-schooled students have to face their own type of challenges that they will have to overcome. For these reasons I cannot stand for home-schooling. In this case, I will admit that old school beats new school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9db7e2148432,99C8EAF5A468,"Our beloved principal has been considering making it mandatory for students to perform community service.
+
+Some students already participate in community service and others do not even wish to.
+
+It is a hard decision to make, but like every choice a person has to make, it is important. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9b68f49b91f7,99C8EAF5A468,"So many students do not wish to, or may not have time to, participate in community service. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a787dc3399c1,99C8EAF5A468,"Those of them who do not wish to do such things, but have the time to, will be upset and angry, although they will do it anyway.
+
+The others who do not have the time at all because of family matters, sports, jobs, and things like that will probably not even show up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e06a5500ae8,99C8EAF5A468,Parents of these children would be upset that they are being taken away to do community service when they are needed at home. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5a6ee830ebd8,99C8EAF5A468,These parents will be asking why and we will have to answer them the best we can. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f5ec65f74d03,99C8EAF5A468,"Students who already do community service will have no problem at all with it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b98858dc64c,99C8EAF5A468,They will most likely encourage it and do their best to help in any way possible. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4bdba33dd28,99C8EAF5A468,"Some students would like to participate in community service, but do not know how. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+430afe027314,99C8EAF5A468,"They would be grateful for the help that we would give them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03ed4143574e,99C8EAF5A468,Extra community service has the possibility of being a new way of punishment for students who misbehave. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3e3770843dff,99C8EAF5A468,"Not only all of this, but it would help keep our community clean. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e77670ace0d,99C8EAF5A468,Just think about how wonderful it would be to live in a world where one person helps another person who helps the community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+75da3efede18,99C8EAF5A468,So many ways to improve our lives and the lives of others: ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3be6f4fcffe,99C8EAF5A468,"tutoring, helping clean, aiding older people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dbf1bb06e841,99C8EAF5A468,So many things that we could do to make our living environment cleaner: ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73995cdb8eaf,99C8EAF5A468,"picking up trash, cleaning statues and public places, un-polluting our rivers and lakes, helping out in so many ways. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db0f1d3f8ced,99C8EAF5A468,"Mandatory community service would be a great way to aid other people. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+f70215dec5b5,99C8EAF5A468,"You probably already know all of this, but I told you anyway because you should know that I believe community service would be a helpful thing to everybody, even if they don't know it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+73de22b41e3a,99DD22237B48,"I personally think that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Position,Effective,,,
+4d393507d955,99DD22237B48,"The people around count of having a better life in the country but not giving they what they want will bring big problems the nation. Its overruled to decleared the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner you have to be fair. It doesn't matter if you have more popular votes than others you have to win by having regular votes. The Electoral Colleges metod is not being democratic at all in modern sence. And it seems like is the electors who elect the president, not the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5799f7ba370,99DD22237B48,The trust of the peole had been betrayed. It is the entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the natonal popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa2b6d9c67a8,99DD22237B48,"There's five reason for retaining the Electoral College despite its democratic pedigree; all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons: 1) Certainty of Outcome 2)Everyone's President 3)Swing State 4)Big State and last but not less 5)Avoid Run-Off Elections. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+309a643282f5,99DD22237B48,So why not do one of them. Why not? Because your scared that your democracy will fail or not win. But whats more important you or your nation?    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0ee7c31c4bba,99E3E923B36F,"Did you know that in that in 2016 a projection was made by Tesla for the release of a car that can drive by itself with no human assistence 90 percent of the time driving? Many car companies are considering this new technology for their own car brand, but is it really in the best interest of the drivers? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9eff6bb601de,99E3E923B36F,Driverless cars are a dangerous creation ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b55673c59ba4,99E3E923B36F,driverless cars are not soley driven by humans ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68ed109aa140,99E3E923B36F,the technology of the car is not guarunteed to be cooperative at all times ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd7d2c368433,99E3E923B36F,there is the danger of law suits going against the people who manufacture these automobiles. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+417d0bc57a5a,99E3E923B36F,Automated driving is projected to be driven by the technology that it is equipped with most of the time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0305fbeda20c,99E3E923B36F,This is an unsafe idea because technology has proven to be faulty with many other inventions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f5d3152b9757,99E3E923B36F,The technology of the car is the same as any other technology. New drivers may learn only how to drive an automated car ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd196da82443,99E3E923B36F,This can lead to carelessness and irresponsibility ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c35312a4abc3,99E3E923B36F,the dangers of this car are high. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39ea11a6a51b,99E3E923B36F,"Not only are they high because of the safety gear price , but it may also come with a price for the manufactureer. There is the chance of large lawsuits and sueing against the companies creating these cars. If a human was to gets injured in an accident created by the car, or if the car was bought with faulty technology, these companies could be facing extremely large law suits with multidigit numbers in cash. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6a5f9d2350d,99E3E923B36F,"Overall, driverless cars are an unsafe idea. This car could leave a lot of damage to many. Driverless cars a bad idea because they are not soley controlled by humans, the technology of the car is not guarunteed to be cooperative at all times, and there is a danger of lawsuits going against the people who manufacture these automobiles. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f309ad6ba89c,99FD4F79B07D,I agree that students should take their cell phones to school and be able to use them during lunch periods and other free times. The cell phones will have to be off during class but in our free times we could use them. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1d6ecd53fd7e,99FD4F79B07D,i think its a great way to refresh your mind a little and then go back to work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c898b5574a6,99FD4F79B07D,I would say also that bringing a cell phone to school is okay because we wont be using them during class only on free times. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b70651376cfb,99FD4F79B07D,It would be better if they would let us bring cell phones to school because when a student is bored they can always refresh their mind by using their cell phones on their lunch period or their free times. That way if we bring cell phones and they don't let us students might be using their cell phones during class and their not going to be paying attention to the teacher. And if we knew that we could bring cell phones we wouldn't be using our cell phones behind the desk so that the teacher doesn't catch us. If we do that because we know we cant bring any cell phones to school we are going to be on our cell phone and we are not going to be paying attention to the teacher about what she's teaching us. If we knew that we could bring cell phones we would just wait for our lunch period to use them or on our free times. That way we could be paying attention to the teacher and not using our cell phones because we know that we could use them on our lunch period or free times. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf711c414c88,99FD4F79B07D,Another reason i think we should be able to bring cell phones to school is that if we bring cell phones to school and we cant bring them we are going to get in trouble for using our cell phones and not paying attention to the teacher. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dad485b8436e,99FD4F79B07D,Also if we don't pay attention to the teacher we wont be able to understand the work or the homework she gives us and we wont do it because we don't understand it. If we don't do our work or our homework we are going to get bad grades and our grades are going to go down. That's my other reason why i think we should be able to bring cell phones instead of bringing them when we cant and be using them in school. Most of the students that have cell phones would like to bring them to school and some do so they can be using them when the teacher is not looking at them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3a724720189,99FD4F79B07D,Another reason that they should let us bring cell phones to school is so that we wont have to be scared that the teacher might catch us and get in trouble for it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5cfc864a8d01,99FD4F79B07D,When we know we could bring cell phones to school we could just bring them off and during our lunch period or free time we can turn them on and use them without fearing that the teacher is going to catch you using it when your not supposed to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b6195e3b23b2,99FD4F79B07D,if you have your cell phone on during class and you forgot to put it on silent if it rings or something the teacher can catch you right away and might take your cell phone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0509fa3a6fd2,99FD4F79B07D,then she would tell your parents you have it and they need to go get it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+460edc5c75bf,99FD4F79B07D,These are my reasons to say that they should let us bring cell phones to ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7d1db8567e41,9A0972A02B2A,"Imagine, not being able to play in the biggest basketball game of your life because your grades were not as good as the principal would expect them to be ",Lead,Effective,,,
+068ea59a6250,9A0972A02B2A,I find it very unfair that students are not allowed to participate in school sports or other activities with a C average. ,Position,Effective,,,
+02c2e85d4ce0,9A0972A02B2A,Interpreting this law may cause many conflicts such as making a sport team not do as well ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8935c78f43e,9A0972A02B2A,and affect the students future ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa912eb07dfe,9A0972A02B2A,not allowing the students to play in the game may cause the team to lose an important game ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b2bb34efda9c,9A0972A02B2A,"In Red Silver, New Jersey, RELATIVE_NAME, who was very good at basketball was unable to play in the championship game because his grades weren't that well. As the game was close come to the fourth quarter,
+
+RELATIVE_NAMEs team couldn't hold onto the game. RELATIVE_NAME was averaging 22.9 points a game, 12 rebounds, and 10 assists, and those statistics in the championship could've made his team possibly win as they lost by 20 points. RELATIVE_NAME missed being eligible for the game by one point in his average.
+
+His average was an 82, which is a C, and
+
+B average is an 83. RELATIVE_NAME missing the championship game affected his team for the worst, as the Red
+
+Silver could've won its first basketball championship ever. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+13df3fff408c,9A0972A02B2A,"Also, having a C average can affect your future greatly. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a62f4119d80,9A0972A02B2A,"RELATIVE_NAME, tall and corpulent, was very good at football, yet not a great student. RELATIVE_NAME was being scouted by Division1 scouts from colleges such as Florida. Being a C+ student was his only fear from making the ""big colleges"" in the nation. In Maui, RELATIVE_NAME dominated the football season. Unfortunately, he was forced to sit out of the biggest game in his career because he was not academically eligible. RELATIVE_NAME was affected so greatly on this incident, all of his Division1 scholarships were gone because the scouts didn't want a student like RELATIVE_NAME in the school. RELATIVE_NAME was not very intelligent, but if he was to have someone tutor him, he would've went to any college he wanted to go to. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf40045423dc,9A0972A02B2A,"i think that maintaining a C average to play on the school sports team or other activities the school offers. RELATIVE_NAME and RELATIVE_NAME
+
+both were affected off of this negatively as they could have had potential in going far in life. So in my opinion, i think that the principal should let students participate in school sports, as long as they get help in the subjects they are struggling in. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e0058e438843,9A0B8CB86C16,"Today, 1976, we found a face on the land of mars. When we all saw the picture we get surprised.
+
+Sence the day of that picture all of us working in NASA tried to find out what was that. It did have a great impact to NASA because if someone else saw the picture, it will make panic to the audience and the world.
+
+So all those years we studied mars and it's land's forms to see if there were others that look a like. We didn't find other that look a like so people start to make their own ideas of the face. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fd28c810fddc,9A0B8CB86C16,"Most people though that was made for aliens, but it wasn't. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0117b9a8e3e2,9A0B8CB86C16,We discovered that there was nothing on there just rocks and natural land. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+04bcfb125df9,9A0B8CB86C16,"And one of are partners came with the idea of a natural structure or a mesa. He think in that because if people or aliens live in there it's most be something in there that help us see if they live in there.
+
+NASA send people to see if they could find something in there that may help us, but not. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd86cf7ccd97,9A0B8CB86C16,So we decided to show it to the world because it was just a mesa. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+691ecb307e11,9A0B8CB86C16,"People got scared in the start but when they see that there were no aliens they relax and some studious used that for movies, books, etc. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c1f1cf4b5161,9A0B8CB86C16,"And sense that day everyone it's okay with stuff that they don't understand, because they know that is just something new. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3800fc1c0910,9A12F67BA18B,Why do people hate the electoral College Proccess? It's just trying to choose a more helpful priesident. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+dcf55a476963,9A12F67BA18B,"Although the Electoral College should be abolished for there dispicable disision making,there just choosing a way to get a better prisident. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+91de1d0f9d79,9A12F67BA18B,"Although there just doing the proccess to help peoples everyday lives, but also the proccess is to help other people choose the right prisident and not just because they can talk proffessionaly on a TV screen but to choose the one with a pure heart about helping the people and not just themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4b1c7972d541,9A12F67BA18B,The Electoral College process is showing how to choose the right way for a good prisident. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bee02def6a69,9A12F67BA18B,"Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsiblities are....""(office of the federal register, source 1). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07a041cbc014,9A12F67BA18B,this process will help choose a president not by how professional or handsome he look but by the his chocies and background he or she has made in the past. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9788255ec860,9A12F67BA18B,"The winner-takes-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates- as we saw in[2012's] election- to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states....""(Posner, source 3,3. swing states,passage 20). But why do people hate this process? Just because it is antiquated doesn't mean it is a terible process, but people and there studorn ways will not drop this stupid stituation and go on with a ""normal"" life. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+298d35981f89,9A12F67BA18B,"Even thought this process is antiquated done not mean it need to be abolished and destroy but the true reason why everybody today hate the process is because we want somebody professional but the process chooses the the president right for the cause and not if he professional. We get caught up in this world, but  we forget what the true meaning of being a president. Being a president is a honor but it come with difficult task and you need to learn to be a leader and not be the person behind the mask.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+138be28b179f,9A529A48D35F,The electoral college is not a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bbfc3027257e,9A529A48D35F,Voters really dont get to vote for the President . A slate of electoral is the person to elect the President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+120b2589bf0e,9A529A48D35F,"This system is called a disaster factor , the U.S. should be lucky the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a538a846232,9A529A48D35F,"There are also people that want to stay with keeping electoral college . The electoral college restores most of the weight on the political balance that by population in large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the constitution. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+84092ac0563f,9A529A48D35F,The electoral college is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+238ebbf75cab,9A529A48D35F,The canidates dont spend time in the states they know theres nochance of winning. Its a winner takes all kinda thing. In the 2000 campaign about 17 states didn't get to see there canadidates at all . States like Rhode Island and South Carolina and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a campaign ad. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53b87c807980,9A529A48D35F,"Here is some information on the electroral college ,Every 4 years the presidential election is held on the Tuesday after the first monday inNovember. You can help choose your state's electors when you vote for President . When you vote your actually voting for your candidate's electors. The electoral college has 538 electors. 270 electoral votes are required to elect the President. After the election your governor prepares a certificate of ascertinment listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The certificate also declares the winning canidate in your state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18744bbca83d,9A529A48D35F,State legislatures are responsible for picking electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dc59946d7748,9A529A48D35F,"In the 1960's segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the democratice electors with new who would oppose John F. Kennedy.  in 1960 also Hawaii sent in 2 slates of electors to congress . Luckily , Vice President Richard Nixon was presiding over the senate validated his only opponet's electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7a7bdc34f6a,9A529A48D35F,The electoral congress should not be used it's unfair . It should be changed to be the popular vote for the president in the U.s. . It's unfair to the people there not really voting.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5bf8051ff316,9A7E9F3D7FA9,Policy 1 I believe is better because as long as the students turn the cell phones off during class time it would be fine. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ddd53a361fe8,9A7E9F3D7FA9,The students should be able to use their cell phones at lunch or in their free time so that they can call parents if they need to ask them something like whether to ride the bus or take a car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e81654da3c2,9A7E9F3D7FA9,"Also policy 1 would be better because the student would be more likely to pay attention in class if they were able to use the cell phones at lunch. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc284a46bfba,9A7E9F3D7FA9,I think the kids would be very thankful for Policy 1 instead of Policy 2 ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6563de3433d2,9A7E9F3D7FA9,"because they love cell phones, and problem dislike school which would make them enjoy school as much as cell phones. You could even give the kids websites to go to and do work in class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+038261761c2c,9A7E9F3D7FA9,Parents would even like it better because they could get a hold of their children if they needed to instead of having to wait till after school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+feef20b86590,9A7E9F3D7FA9,It would also be better because the kid can talk their friends on the other side of the building. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f1d28fbf492,9A7F7ACCC1D9,I am writing this letter to inform you that requiring all students to perform community service is a great idea ,Position,Effective,,,
+fecb25d5e472,9A7F7ACCC1D9,Even though other students may not like it I'm behind it 100 percent. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db9c676d0c6d,9A7F7ACCC1D9,"The students who don't like it say ""it takes too much time away from what they need or want to do"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9defb76e09ff,9A7F7ACCC1D9,but in truth these are the lazy failing students that don't want to do anything in life. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+afe8aead28aa,9A7F7ACCC1D9,Even so there are students who would love the idea and would go for it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+54e40728cb32,9A7F7ACCC1D9,"I can assure you that the kids who find community service ""boring"" or ""a waste of time""
+
+will soon see that performing community service will not only help the community, but inspire the world to do the same. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+876c9070d575,9A7F7ACCC1D9,Community service can maybe even lead to a greener tomorrow ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c0874dfa213,9A7F7ACCC1D9,Principal don't think twice about not having all students perform community service. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+13a273fd3600,9A9C3C57D474,Driverless cars are a great investment and idea for our country to encourage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9934d742db39,9A9C3C57D474,"Not only do the cut down on fuel usage, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ff34587151cf,9A9C3C57D474,also reduce the number of accidents. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cd3caa880199,9A9C3C57D474,"The futuristic automobiles could revolutionize the country. Drivereless cars are a fantastic idea, and could create several benifits for the country. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+36c96b21731c,9A9C3C57D474,Driverless cars have the potentiol to drastically reduce fuel usage. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8bdf6e1b02ee,9A9C3C57D474,"n the opening paragraph of the article, the author states, ""the cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis."" Less fuel used for automobiles would empower the United States to spend less money on oil and natural gas imports. Additionally, less fuel polution released by cars would help make the enviroment a safer place for current and future generations. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44fa227c3464,9A9C3C57D474,"In the article, the author talks about the use of GPS and sensors used in the cars. Relying on computers to transport us is a much safer alternative compared to the current option. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a73be72c71c,9A9C3C57D474,"The driverless cars, that are largely computer powered, leave very little room for human error, which would drastically reduce the number of automobile accidents. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+99039fce5070,9A9C3C57D474,"Oppontens of driverless cars may argue that these cars are not safe in the event of unforseen circumstances, such as accidents or road problems. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+40d1ecde0540,9A9C3C57D474,"However, driverless cars, as stated in the article, ""are designed to to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill."" Thus, in an emergancy situation, the driver can take over the car can advance past the situation and continue to move along without any issue. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9dd2a7966f2d,9A9C3C57D474,"driverless cars could be the best thing to happen to automobiles since automobiles were invented. They could reduce the amount of pollution, and save the United States millions on oil imports. Furthermore, self driving cars can make the roads a safer place to be. Although it may seem scary to some, and there may be a few bumps along the road, driverless cars could make the world a better place to be.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0935732f5d7e,9AEBAA2BE62D,"
+I believe the way the American Goverment is run is injust and outdated. I believe this because the way we as America elect a new president is unfair to many people. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7f6bd09a2102,9AEBAA2BE62D,The reason I say that is the electoral college is unjust is 538 people should'nt be voting for more than a billion people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b91ca8a22949,9AEBAA2BE62D,"The way I believe our new President should be selected is by a majority rule, which ever Canidate has the most votes should win not based off people who vote for our state we live in. Even though the majority of the time the representative from his or her state votes depending on the popular vote from there state, but the reason im saying this is that he or she has the power to pick whatever he or she wants ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5728a04b8313,9AEBAA2BE62D,Also another reason would be that the people only vote for a slate whether it be democratic or republic people in the slate can just change there mind and pick a differnt side. I would understand this system before our time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3dd74d8b1e93,9AEBAA2BE62D,but now we have so much technology people can vote from anywhere they dont have to go put a paper in a box anymore. The system is outdated and unfair to many people. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9df12d744c29,9AEBAA2BE62D,"Some people would argue against the point that the representative votes depending on his or her states popular vote, but there has been and will be more of the representative picking against his state if it stays like this. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3e954b8af1cd,9AEBAA2BE62D,Like I said before the Electoral College system is outdated and unfair. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4d75f2f815aa,9B0344F83C66,"Now the fact is that the electoral college works well for our country, but when the population that is voting for president is actually voting for a candidate to vote for their state, that is lying to the voters and is morally wrong. We cannot lie to the population and be a strong country at the same time. We want to vote for our country's leaders not have someone else vote for us. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4c8a0a39c498,9B0344F83C66,"We have gone on long enough with the electoral college, it is outdated and inefficient. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0e35bb9a7959,9B0344F83C66,It dooes work to keep complications from arising in our voting procedures none the less. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+de47ff52abb8,9B0344F83C66,And I will admit regional preferance is also a huge problem. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+06a9cac1643d,9B0344F83C66,What if the Presiident ignores a certain region of the country in crisis? It is a risk we must take. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1792f0b97e2d,9B0344F83C66,We are a country that has been falsely relying on the people and lying to their faces about it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+21091d5e5145,9B0344F83C66,"I personally find it offensive, angering, and morally wrong. I do not want to see this atrocity being allowed to fester. In 2012 about one-half of the legal american voters took part in it, according to Richard A. Posner. That is millions, if not billions of people! All voting when their votes didn't matter.
+
+""In 1968 a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election"" according to Bradford Plumer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9c81c1fab74,9B0344F83C66,"The electoral college is unfair, it has been proven. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2e394796df16,9BD577FF5D3C,I strongly believe that students should get to have a C average to work in sports or other activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9deb2d56e4a8,9BD577FF5D3C,"Without this opportunity, many children will lack in physical ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fda75bbed072,9BD577FF5D3C,"With a B average, many students may not keep up to that level, which overtime, makes them grow weaker. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8b6e01e72042,9BD577FF5D3C,"Not having activities and sports will hurt people physically, but also mentally. It can cause more stress to student's minds. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3fc33196f8f9,9BD577FF5D3C,"Students should get as much physical activity as they want, but if they have to have a B average, then this will make them get worse at what they may do best ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07faadbaa28a,9BD577FF5D3C,"These people should be getting enough freedom to do an activity for at least a C average. They will lack in physical skills and it may even mess up peoples dreams. If you know most of your students maintain at a C average, then leave them like that ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c84c09076278,9BD577FF5D3C,"Of course, changing the policy might make them work harder ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0b5ace80b232,9BD577FF5D3C,"its just not fair. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2fb195b74bfc,9BD577FF5D3C,Students may see a positive change in there grade average ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b8ed4e789e8d,9BD577FF5D3C,"if someone likes to play a sport, then there shouldn't be a change in policy. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8f339dc8864a,9BD577FF5D3C,"There will be a positive side, but also a negative side to it. Students will get weaker without working in sports, or may even be much more lonely ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83ed7ae1729a,9BD577FF5D3C,"In a young persons life, they don't want to be lonely. They want to be more social and talk with friends, participate in an activity. All these things help students grow up more healthier in life. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f977c36e9719,9BD577FF5D3C,"Some students may think its easy, but for most, it is hard. Since most of your students have a C average, then there is some bad effects on changing it to a B average ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82daf724ad52,9BD577FF5D3C,One important thing is stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef277022e0f3,9BD577FF5D3C,"Every student wants to go to school stress free and going to special activities is a huge help in that. If people have to maintain a B average, it can add stress, because they are so caught up into trying so hard to maintain a B average. Stress at a young age may cause students to have a more lonely life. They may not have a social life and be sad most of the time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba266b2553d6,9BD577FF5D3C,"As you see, principle, it is a much better idea to keep the policy the same. Students will lack physical education, it will have a bad negative affect, and it causes more stress to students, if sports and activities are only open to B average students. People will not like this new idea because they used to have so much of a good time, but with this, it could possibly change their life a lot. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fba88fa486b8,9BDB556267D8,The Electoral college is unnecesary ,Position,Adequate,,,
+50ec0a0e9537,9BDB556267D8,"because the people of the United States do not always get to control what their state electors vote for. The state legislatures are the ones responsible for choosing the electors, not the people. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c354a548deb3,9BDB556267D8,Others may say that the electoral college works and that it should be here to stay. Many opinions are to be heard. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+439872e3aa6e,9BDB556267D8,A reason that people may want the electoral college is stay in place would be that the electors would do all the dirty work for them and they won't have to cast two votes the year that the new president will be chosen. The electors also get benefits for representing the states vote. They may also want to take advantage that the electoral college is still running. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+88a0d3ebb65a,9BDB556267D8,"The main reason that the electoral college is unnecesary is because the voters do not get to choose who the candidates are for the electoral college, therefore not knowing who the electors are and also not knowing who the electors want to vote for. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+82af195fea18,9BDB556267D8,"The reason that some electors choose the wrong president are because the people don't really get a say in who the electors will vote for. They may protest and make signs to show their state electors who they people want as their president and the electors might listen to them, but overall the decision is the electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+54935354026c,9BDB556267D8,"The state legislators are the ones responsibe for choosing the electors, not the people of the state. So the elector may be a democrat and the majority of the people in that particular state are republicans. Would that be fair that that state was to vote for the opposite person running for presidency when the people obviously want the other candidate? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+76347fa68c33,9BDB556267D8,"Many people have a lot to say about this particular topic. some may say that the electoral college works. Some people may say that the electoral college is not worth the bother. Many opinions are out there about the electoral college. but i say that the electoral college is unfair,irrational, and outdated.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6504ae2cd8a4,9C1132980450,"Driverless cars are coming! Google have these driverless cars. Companies are making these, ""driverless"" cars. These driverless cars are not actually...well, driverless. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+501c4dd1a78c,9C1132980450,"Electrical cars are coming, and you won't want to miss it. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+41fef6a096b3,9C1132980450,"Television and movies have developed a theory of these cars. The theory is how the car may look and also, drive. Google has had cars that could drive independently under certain circumstances since 2009. Google cars have driven over half a million miles without a crash. google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and a inertial motion sensor.
+
+Companies are already, and have already, been making these computer driven cars. As an example, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Google made the modified Toyota Prius, and BMW announced the development of ""Traffic Jam Assistant."" Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.
+
+These, ""driverless"" cars are not really driverless. Antilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless carb to take us wherever we desire, but Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project, believes that the technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream. The Google Cars must have an alert driver when driving. The Google Car cannot pull in and out of driveways. When dealing with road contrustion or navigating through an accident, the driver must take over then as well. The BMW, ""Traffic Jam Assistant,"" can reach speeds up to 25 miles per hour, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+621dcbff8868,9C1132980450,"Driverless cars are in the making. Google has already made a few cars that are some what driverless. Companies are on the uprising of completeing their first driverless car. The cars they're making out to seem driverless are not actually driverless, but they're in the making. The technology is close enough. Electrical cars are coming, and you won't want to miss it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9f543370549e,9C2E6F09CC73,"At one point, I believed the electoral college was a bad idea. Although, after reading this, my view on the matter as changed dramatically. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+432fafce4ae5,9C2E6F09CC73,"The electoral college keeps a balance in a country, a balance very much needed. I agree with it one hundred percent. ",Position,Effective,,,
+95e48a19a630,9C2E6F09CC73,"The electoral college was established as a compromise between election of the President by congress, and election of the President by popular citizen vote. The founding fathers felt it would given congress too much power if it elected the President all by itself. They also felt if citizens chose the seat by themsleves there wouod be chaos. They decided on a nice in between; they both choose, well sort of. What many citizens do not know is that when they cast their vote, they are not voting for the president, but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the President. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bfcd13aeae43,9C2E6F09CC73,The problem with citizens voting diectly for the president can be broken into two categories: uncertinty ,Claim,Effective,,,
+106424bdb0ad,9C2E6F09CC73,underqualification. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+852d9b33760f,9C2E6F09CC73,"If the vote were solely based on citizen votes, the statisitcal outcome of the event would be crazy. With the majority of the electoral college applying the winner take all approach, it cuts those numbers down incredibly. It is allot easier to confirm a winner out of 538 votes then it is  to confirm one out of hundreds of millions of votes now isn,t it? 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4a29f3fb9bc5,9C2E6F09CC73,Another thing that makes it hard for citizens to directlly vote for their president is being underqualified. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c8d17016859,9C2E6F09CC73,"Many people think for themselves and only themselves. They are not qualified to make choices for the sake of the whole country, that is where the electors come in. These are people chosen by state conventions, state party committees, and sometimes candidates themselves. They hear the ideas of the people and manage them so that they are able to help everyone. They are pro politicians whose job in life is to preserve our country
+
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ce8f8d9bd09f,9C2E6F09CC73,"The electoral college is not of a democracy, but of a dictatorship. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d0ce9f7f382f,9C2E6F09CC73,"The U.S government lets people choose these electors so they feel important in the choices our country makes. We take time to study our favorite candidates, and if the electoral college does not agree with them, they are pushed to the side. What happens to the people who did not vote for the, ""right"" candidate? They are forever unheard. Sentenced to live in a community where they are silcenced. I do not agree with the electoral college because agree with our fore father Abraham Lincoln. He said this was supposed to be a country of the people, by the people, and for the people.
+
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e4ed8c3655ed,9C2E6F09CC73,"You are wrong in so many levels sir. the electoral college does not exclude democracy, it promotes it! ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+de8c97d1163a,9C2E6F09CC73,"Every citizen of legal age uses their god given right to express their political preference in the hopes of improving our country. The electoral college prevents regional rulership over areas that prefer one political side. It re-elects every four years to let everyone know, though your thoughts may not have been used in these past times, know that they have surely been heard. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e04c46cf797f,9C2E6F09CC73,"Things like the electoral college make me proud to live in the United States of America,  the greatest country in the world. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5810072223f1,9C4444C557FB,The policy i believe is better is policy one ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1ca9961d6087,9C4444C557FB,I believe this policy is better because if we keep our phones off during class for free time or lunch we should be able to use them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10166e55f3db,9C4444C557FB,I think we should use them because since its free time its not gone to hurt any body to. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd61d8600355,9C4444C557FB,"Another good reason to use them is because instead of kids talking during class, they would much rather texting or calling there friends that's not nearby. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+355df7e5396f,9C4444C557FB,"Another opportunity for kids being on their cell phones during free hour is that if they have a love one or somebody that needs to be called then they can call them right then and there, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9130a482d9b2,9C4444C557FB,"like if they need to check on there sibling if there home by them self. Another way cell phones can be useful is if they need to call there parents to see what they need to do when they get home from school, instead of walking all the way to the office to call somebody important. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1feb21f14ba1,9C9F8BC72552,I believe that cell phones should not be allowed at school whatsoever. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+50f5a7d91f4d,9C9F8BC72552,Some students at school will get distracted with their phones during class while texting their friends or classmates. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a34eae27094,9C9F8BC72552,"These students sometimes get caught, loose their phone, and a parent might have to come into school to get it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8376f7368302,9C9F8BC72552,"The phones can be used for multiple reasons during school, distractions, and getting answers to test, quizzes, and possibly MCAS testing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+95df0abbb236,9C9F8BC72552,Students can just go to the main office and use the school's phones if they have to call someone. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b94a7346ade,9C9F8BC72552,These phones are a distraction to the students and to teachers if they catch people with cell phones ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7054404661f8,9C9F8BC72552,"Cell phones should only be used after school hours, dismissal, if they need to get a ride home. Other than that it is not necessary to have phones in school and be using them to talk to each other. Kids would not be following the rules made if they could have their phones with them, they would carry them and never turn them off during a class. Teachers would have build-ups of students phones because the students basically would care about when they could use it, they would do as they please and get their phones taken away. This rule would probably effect most high-school and middle-school students, not elementary students. The older students would not be following rules and would act as though they do not care about the rule, all they'd care about is the fact that they could have phones. During classes like gym and health and foreign language people would use their phones because people would not care about those classes, they may see it as a free period like a directed study/study hall. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bc3b4beef43,9C9F8BC72552,"Cell phone use during school hours is not a good idea because students will text each other in class, even though they are not supposed to, and will be distracted from their class and would not learn anything that could be important to the class ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3126d91dbaf9,9C9F8BC72552,"Teachers would not be able to teach a class without confiscating a cell phone, and the office could get phone calls complaining about how their kid's phone was taken away by a teacher. After a while students would just use their phones whenever they can and will not care if it gets taken away ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a58338e370e8,9C9F8BC72552,"No student can learn if they are using a cell phone during a class, there are some important things that could show up and can't complain about it. Then come time for MCAS, tests, quizzes, some students will not be prepared and will do very, very badly in those subjects ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2abbe0dcb708,9C9F8BC72552,"If students were allowed to use phones, they would not follow the guidelines, would text, call people, and try to get answers from people for a test or quiz. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+05f8daa643a8,9C9F8BC72552,School would become a completely hectic place to be with phones everywhere and people distracting themselves and others form school and learning. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f51adeb72465,9C9F8BC72552,"Due to phones, students do not learn as much and get easily distracted from class if they are texting somebody else during school. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+818a60bc638c,9CB26CEEE2D7,"I think community service should be something everyone does to help others, or to help the Earth. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0c2c3711f3f9,9CB26CEEE2D7,Some people think community service is a waste of time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b48567bec169,9CB26CEEE2D7,"when the air is polluted, and more people get sick per week or day from it, it is time to start cleaning up are community ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5345a91c93f7,9CB26CEEE2D7,"I think the help of the elementary kids would be great for them, so they can get work done, and not just have to ask the teacher for help, but they can ask their tutor also. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7df038719fcb,9CB26CEEE2D7,"they can go home after school, and have no work with a tutors help. The tutor would feel good at the end since the student they helped enjoyed the help of the work, and also enjoy meeting someone new to them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+387bbe0f7da5,9CB26CEEE2D7,The community need to be cleaned up so our air pollution can get better than what it is right now. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf28c57038de,9CB26CEEE2D7,"We should have a couple kids clean up places during study hall hours, and after school. Also, the lakes, rivers, and oceans are getting polluted from all the junk in the water. So all the fish, turtles, and other sea creatures are dying from the pollution thrown onto the ground, which can get blown into the water, or thrown into the water. I think we should have kids recycle paper and other recyclable items to reuse them, instead of cutting down trees for the paper, and make the new items. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+97c6c060376a,9CB26CEEE2D7,"The schools should have a Recycling competition where the Study hall class that brings in the most items to be recycled, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cfe7370c61d0,9CB26CEEE2D7,"get a free day party for the study hall the whole week. The competition goes on each month. After each month, they have an assembly to get all the items collected, then they put them together to see how much they recycled that month. It would encourage kids to recycle more often, and give a little bit of a competition for the school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec3f6ea1a59e,9CB26CEEE2D7,"Community service is a good thing to help clean environment, and also help other who need it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5a60b5ec6979,9CB26CEEE2D7,"If we didn't have community service, our community and planet would be a wreck. We need more people to help for community service so it can go by faster each day, and makes others feel good about where they live. If we didn't have community service, you would mostly be walking on trash every step you take, since some people throw their trash on the floor instead of a trash or dumpster. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3e3fb3090717,9CB26CEEE2D7,"Some people dislike community service since they like to be inside the whole day either in front of a television, on a computer, or playing a video game. So they think community service is boring and not worth their time, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6db645d7a0e1,9CB26CEEE2D7,"but they need to learn that they can save the environment by just picking up a wrapper on the ground, and spending time away from the electronics, and go outside with friends, or pick up trash in their neighborhood. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+4f9ce8a469d0,9CB26CEEE2D7,"The people that do community service, should be proud of what they do to help others, and keep up the work they do. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b568d3b4cea2,9CB26CEEE2D7,"So I think all students should perform community service so we have an excellent environment, and more people can look at teens, and not think of them as a bad reputation like adults do right now. They think of some teens as trouble, bratty, and they don't do anything. But other teens are getting looked up to by doing different amounts of work to help out, and also adults think they are a good reputation since they help out more. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8261d05db137,9CB26CEEE2D7,"Community service is a good deed, and not only kids should do it, adults should also be doing some community service since it is something that is excellent for the community. They put responsibility on kids to clean up, even though adults throw things on the floor too. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6d0b9d49ac8b,9CC05FDD1C8F,Your first policy sounds great ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c4324c4a73d0,9CC05FDD1C8F,because many students now are sneaking in their stuff inside the school and teachers are not really great at looking for stuff. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cc92c7c9bef,9CC05FDD1C8F,"might be great because they may change ideas and their parents might be waiting for their son to pick them up. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9dae8da33be8,9CC05FDD1C8F,It might lower how much they cheat off of another person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+442e4e0cff29,9CC05FDD1C8F,Of course if those two persons are at free time at the same time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+559e64c31f91,9CC05FDD1C8F,My opinion is that the teachers pick up their cell phones before class this might be bad if they steal them. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+38df2380b014,9CC05FDD1C8F,Cell phones in school might also increase the probability of catching the cheaters by looking in the cell phone memory. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4168182a948f,9CC05FDD1C8F,"The thing they should do is that all students have free time at the same time so that they do not try to cheat in class. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70298d533fe8,9CC05FDD1C8F,"You should try this for one year and if your satisfied with the results you may do it again.
+
+You may tell the students at the beginning of the school year that the cell phone privilege will be taken away if they don't follow directions and apply policy #2 those are my opinions. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1917383a71e,9CC05FDD1C8F,Maybe some students don't have cell phones and don't want other students to have them. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c63de6f7c4a9,9CC05FDD1C8F,I think just about every student would like to have their cell phone in school ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cd87c2701421,9CC05FDD1C8F,"and you might eve add more privileges if they do it right for so many years they may bring MP3 games and other electronics so that they feel almost like at home.
+
+If any students breaks the rules they may not bring the cell phones and the other privileges you might have gave them you can tell the teachers which students are not allowed to bring electronics and if they see them with a electronic they can take it away.
+
+If it was a borrowed electronic the student the borrowed from gets taken away the privilege as well.
+
+If so many students are breaking the rules than put policy #2 for the rest of the year.
+
+The next year you may start fresh if you feel like it . 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e2e87110667f,9CC05FDD1C8F,"You might want to think the cell phone policy a little bit deeper if you have any doubts.
+
+That is what I have to say respect the cell phone policy.
+
+Many students are waiting for this policy to come true.
+
+Please think about it.
+
+Some teachers might not like it.
+
+Because they have to do mare things about it and some might get ideas about them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d707e157b51e,9CD92F1E2599,"Dear state senator, as time moves on things needs to change. The way we vote for our president is unfair, outdatede, and irrational. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7d17b75c09eb,9CD92F1E2599,It is time we change things and move to a election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc6ded1eecb8,9CD92F1E2599,The electoral college was founded many years ago by The Founding Fathers. It was a compromise between the election of our President. It selected electors thats would put the vote in after we voted. It was a great idea back then ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d98256ce89b5,9CD92F1E2599,it is time we change this and let the people vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+133944a190b5,9CD92F1E2599,We cann't use the same ways as time moves on ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+01605fbb2923,9CD92F1E2599,This should be an election for the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad7c3a83220a,9CD92F1E2599,In the electoral voters don't even vote for the president. They vote for than elector. This could very well be anyone holding public office ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+739a5cbbc68b,9CD92F1E2599,People sometimes get confused and vote for the wrong candiddate. Back in 1960 louisiana nearly succeeded in replacing all demoratic electors with ones that oppose John F. Kennedy. Somestimes faithless electors have refused to vote for their party. This is outrageous! What is this happens again ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b194a3233369,9CD92F1E2599,We are the that have to live with this president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+73c3b4464de9,9CD92F1E2599,Another reason is because its unfair to voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d29ded9c0864,9CD92F1E2599,the winner-takes-all system shows that caue candidates don't spend time in states they know wont will. And if the electoral college gets a tie it would be horrifying. Leaving it up to the House of Representatives. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09a184ebd889,9CD92F1E2599,"All of this is to show that electoral college should be Abolished. This is outdated, unfair, and irrational use. Putting our faith in people we don't know has caused problems. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+be3b54ecd763,9CE836599EEE,"""I say we change!"" Changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States can be a way better idea to do than keeping the Electoral college. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2df5372c1971,9CE836599EEE,"In the Electoral College system the voters dont vote for the president, they vote for a slate of electors & those slate of electors who in turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a5148110fca,9CE836599EEE,over 60 percent of votes would prefer a direct election of the kind we have now. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+575d373d7d31,9CE836599EEE,"In source 1, they talk about what is the Electoral College & how it works. The Electoral College is a process, not a place. It's process consists of the selection of the electors, a meeting of the electors where they vote for President & Vice President, & the counting of the votes by Congress. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 votes is required to elect the President. In the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Colubia is allocated 3 electors & treated like a state for purposesof the Electoral College. The word ""state"" also refers to the District of Columbia. Every candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. Presidential election is held every 4 years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. When you vote for President you help choose your state's electors because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. Most states have a 'winner take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+17c7af1a4cb3,9CE836599EEE,Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c8131414fc0,9CE836599EEE,"For instance, if you lived in Texas, & wanted to vote for John Kerry, you would be voting for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. It depends on the state to pick the electors in first place. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d32ae3a75349,9CE836599EEE,Sometimes voters get confused about the electors & vote for the wrong candidate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1f4df44dba9,9CE836599EEE,"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legilature nearly suceeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.              ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b2160e18583,9CEF76DD7310,I think that raising the required grade for sports from a C to a B will inspire students to work harder for their grades and since they won't be distracted by sports it will be much more achievable. ,Position,Effective,,,
+bf66a971a0f7,9CEF76DD7310,The most important thing in school is to learn so you can one day hopefully go to college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b84877e1aea,9CEF76DD7310,I don't think sports would help but they allow you to get involved in your school itself. I'm not bashing on sports but as far as priorities go your making the right decision in raising the bar. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2f5b0a891b5,9CEF76DD7310,I think this may be difficult for some students so you should offer some sort of help to get them on track. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+26733a0d14ea,9CEF76DD7310,You could offer an after school study hall or even have other students tutor them. Anything that could help get them going would be great. I'm in sports myself and i love them and can tell you if I was prohibited from them because of my grades I would immediately try to find help or work as hard as i could to bring them back up. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b61182e65724,9CEF76DD7310,"Again, I think that if they can't try in school they should' t be allowed to try in sports. If they aren't getting bad grades from lack of trying though that where the help should be offered. I just think that sports are important too and if they bring their grade up they can enjoy sports and grades all the more. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a4b50e9d2617,9D254F20E5D8,I think that we should change over to election by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+56176539e73e,9D254F20E5D8,"I thinks that because in the Electoral College the voters dont vote on the president, but instead they vote on the electors who then vote for the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3cd0bad27a7,9D254F20E5D8,"""It's official: the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ""The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense....it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. There are five reasons for getting rid of the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigree; all are preactical, not liberal or conservative reasons. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e8be27d1952,9D254F20E5D8,Some people disagree though they think that we should stick with the electoral college. They think its a good way to do the voting because they get to choose the electors who will choose our president. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+34fe0af57119,9D254F20E5D8,"Inconclusion, I think that we should do election by popular vote because then the voters get to choose the president. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f3ff0c1570ee,9D967AA72C96,i just wont to write to the principal at school about the the school policy about the phone ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+b22d0dcf28ae,9D967AA72C96,i think the kids at school should have there phones just when they need them like if something goes wrong maybe they will need to call for help so that's what i thing we need to change at to keep kids safe. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5a2b54d5e60,9D967AA72C96,the kids at school just don't bring them to school to play they need them for good use to let someone or something know what is going on at school if they maybe did something wrong or just to tell someone something. that's why the phone can be a good policy on and at school for every school if the kids need one for there safety and own risk to there life. now i think all students should have a phone at school not to play on them but for there safe keep. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc49f2613e6b,9DB4A7109AAE,we should do Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b57555f12d52,9DB4A7109AAE,because it will be easier to vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1eed4c7ca45,9DB4A7109AAE,and will only use votes of qualified citizens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8382c8a278cd,9DB4A7109AAE,"The Electoral College has a consist selection of the electors, the meeting of electors where they can vote for President and Vice President, and counting electoral votes by congress.
+
+The Electoral College has 538 electors, and majority of 270 electoral votes that is required to elect the presedent. Also, under the 23rd amendment of the constitution, the distric of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for this reason, the word ""state"" also refers to district of columbia.
+
+Plus, the presidential election is held every 4 years on a Tuesday after the first Monday of in November, and when you choose your states electors when you vote for president, you also are actually voting for your candidates electors. After the presidential election, the governor of your state prepares a listing of all the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors called, ""Certificate of Ascertainment"".
+
+Your state also sends a Certificates of ascertainment to the Congress and National Archives as part of the official records of thee presidential election. The Electoral College is also a widely regarded as an anachronoism, which is a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by the candidates who recieved the most popular votes the winner.
+
+This positions are correct in arguing that the Electroal College method is not democratic in modern sense, but it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When people vote for the president they are actually voting for a state of electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f2c567c0020e,9DB4A7109AAE,The outcome of this meathod is that the Electoral College vote is possible but its less likely to dispute over the popular vote. That is why we should do Electoral College.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d4b716a19a85,9DF8A166D993,I think as a citizen of Flordia that the Electoral College should not be apart of our states voting rights because the people voteing do not have a direct vote to the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ad895da3ef5a,9DF8A166D993,"Our state just like many others have a ""Winner-takes-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a5bd5f5cb07,9DF8A166D993,Every election is a unfair election because the people dont get to directly vote for the presiden ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cbb539c800df,9DF8A166D993,"""What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college!"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48eae7707264,9DF8A166D993,not only basic people of the USA think the electoral college should not exit but people who have been important to this country and other commities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+492a7d132dc3,9DF8A166D993,When voting through the electoral college voters dont vote for the president they vote for a slate of eloctors who then elect the president. Which is not right to the people who do vote an the people running for president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8bbd4d46e8b6,9DF8A166D993,its wrong to the country because everyone has the right as a US citizen to elect a president but there not actually voting for the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8306788b9652,9DF8A166D993,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1fcc9d5ecf42,9DF8A166D993,the elecooral college is unfair to all the U.S voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a31faea09ea6,9DF8A166D993,"""Its official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best argument in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60db9138330e,9DF8A166D993,The electoral college is something that should be taken out of the electing process because it dosent give us as U.S citizens our exact rights to vote for president because its the electors who elect the president not the people.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d59b866db369,9E24FDD5A196,"Many people believe that giving students the opportunity to take their classes online would not be beneficial and by doing so, schools would be decreasing the likelihood of productivity in their students. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3b8691723101,9E24FDD5A196,"taking classes online could be tremendously beneficial in the daily life of a student, ",Position,Effective,,,
+50062ac35a74,9E24FDD5A196,by helping them feel more comfortable ,Claim,Effective,,,
+68b2a9f27240,9E24FDD5A196,helping them have the ability to attend while sick ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4f22263fe965,9E24FDD5A196,even by helping them have better access to projects and other assignments that could have easily been forgotten in their home if they did not attend online classes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+627325baf93f,9E24FDD5A196,"For example, everyone knows that feeling of coming home after a long day of work or school. That imaginary switch that immediately turns on in ones brain once they finally step into their home, telling them they can now relax, take off their shoes and do what they want at their own desired pace. Now, imagine if people of all ages, still attending school today could feel completely at ease even while they learn in class, but this time through video conferences. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af46fc557a5f,9E24FDD5A196,"By taking online courses in the comfort of their own home, students can benefit by feeling more eager to ask all the questions they need to and not feel embarrassed nor, worry about others giving them strange looks. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+74fba10926f0,9E24FDD5A196,"Students would also have the ability to sit or adjust space for themselves once their lesson starts. From my own experience in school, I have heard many students complain about how uncomfortable the chairs are and how people keep kicking their seats and so forth. This can be a very big distraction for many students. The amount of discomfort they experience, while they are trying to focus can distract their learning and even cause them to have pains once they return home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0f8174780afe,9E24FDD5A196,"Moreover, having the ability to attend class online can help students not have to miss out on important quizzes, projects, or exams even, while they are sick. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab81128c6d17,9E24FDD5A196,"Waking up early for school is already a hassle for many students and being sick, while having to wake up early could make the student have a much harder time. All a student wants to do is lay in bed and get better soon, but a lot of students often worry about all the work that will be piled up on them once they return to school, making them force themselves to attend. If students do this, it can lead to even worse issues, such as having an unwanted accident at school or even spreading the sickness to multiple other students. Video conferencing can help students stay on track with their work and also help them have better access to their medication when it needs to be taken. Students would not have to deal with unneeded stress from school and could calmly focus their energy on bettering their health. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ac90890fc8f6,9E24FDD5A196,"Furthermore, the use of online lessons can be beneficial when it comes to a students forgetfulness. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19851b76e85d,9E24FDD5A196,"There are a few unfortunate moments in a students day to day life where they stay up late working hard on an assignment that they end up forgetting on their desk, bed, dinner table or anywhere else that is not their backpack. Forgetting to turn in work can hugely affect a students grade, but with the help of online courses, a student can have easy access to their projects and assignments without having to worry about their grade dropping over a simple misplacement. They can have the opportunity to easily locate it and have it by their side once their teacher does any kind of review where the student can also keep up and ask questions, instead of looking around the classroom or peeking at someones paper. Also, if students were to have access to their homework and other important projects at all times they are most likely to work on it until, they are able to complete it due to their conscience reminding them that there is work to be done and that the student had a lot more time to finish it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f94a6b4ddae0,9E24FDD5A196,"In spite of, many individuals believe that there would be far more distractions for students at home than there are at school with the use of online classes ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d6d6fd3eaf75,9E24FDD5A196,but one should take in consideration that students do have the ability to prioritize things that are important to them. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b9ddfa039cba,9E24FDD5A196,"Take many college students for example, some of them take online versions of their classes from home and they are still able to excel to their full potential. By watching lessons online, the students will most likely receive a much better understanding and visual representation of their teachers examples, since their attention will be focused only on what is being shown to them and not around the classroom. Additionally, Students that go to school already work on projects and assignments at home regularly without getting distracted, so taking online classes would be no different than regular school. A student that is determined and knows the importance of paying attention in school would try their best, whether they take online classes or normal classes. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f21895ce0f65,9E24FDD5A196,"To sum up, giving students the chance to have distance learning as an option for them is extremely beneficial in many ways. Not only can a student attend classes more often than usual, but they can also get the chance to learn more and keep up with assignments that could have piled up as their absences increased. Online learning can help a student break out of their shell and talk to their teacher more about their questions and get a more in depth experience in an online classroom. Therefore, these are the reasons why students all around could benefit from this great opportunity.       ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+45bf89f618bf,9E298AE3C1C9,"The passage ""Drivless Cars are Coming"" have negative and positives. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+dc740243fc6f,9E298AE3C1C9,I would say I am against dirivless cars. Why not use cars that we can drive ourselves? Are Drivless cars actually the safest? ,Position,Adequate,,,
+09ec9272a0e3,9E298AE3C1C9,we need to stay with the cars tan we can drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f774ecc3de70,9E298AE3C1C9,"I would also say driveless cars are not the safest. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4706a006a9c,9E298AE3C1C9,If we continue to use the cars we use today we don't put our safety in a computer hands. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f54020d3d7a7,9E298AE3C1C9,I think we should stay accountable for our own safety and make our own decisions while driving ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aeaedaf3c6e8,9E298AE3C1C9,"What if a police car or the ambulance is coming and the car doesn't pull over to the side of the road to let them have a clear passage to get where they need to go? Now you can possibly go to jail, but wait is that on you or the manufacturing company ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc49eda78df6,9E298AE3C1C9,There will be a lot of sewing of company's and a lot of fights between the people of the driveless cars and company's. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+802c64a6e5c6,9E298AE3C1C9,The thing is we the people have a chance to avoid all of this now if we just decide not to make or buy a driveless car. The question you have to ask yourself is will you put your safety in the hands of a driveless car or will you be accountable for your own saftey? It's your choice just make sure you make the right decision.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c38b6b412687,9E2E1FDE4D15,students are require to take community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7053d689da81,9E2E1FDE4D15,helps them get organized ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64e5df1a94ea,9E2E1FDE4D15,helps out the community to be more cleaner. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1bff3a36bc6,9E2E1FDE4D15,"doing community service helps kids stay out of trouble such as gangs, violence, and drugs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee9904c45f89,9E2E1FDE4D15,"it helps kids to be more disciplined, more respectful, more caring for our planet, more careful, more safe, and more mature ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f46f58c8f4be,9E2E1FDE4D15,"Community service is helpful to kids that get bored at home. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a2748947a8b,9E2E1FDE4D15,"Sometimes people think that doing community service is just a waste of time because they don't want to do it or they think that it is just boring. But community service can show you new things. Such as taking care for the elderly, taking care of the planet, respecting others, and helping others. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d92e4da4f89,9E2E1FDE4D15,Those are my reasons on why our school should do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+61c97b91bd74,9E502030CA7E,"Sure, driverless cars sound interesting, but are they worth the risk? With the recent dovelopment of driverless cars, the technology for them is only advancing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+331a6aba084f,9E502030CA7E,"It might be fun, it might be cool, but is it's not safe. Not only would driverless cars be dangerous themselves ",Position,Adequate,,,
+216404fda3eb,9E502030CA7E,"economy dropping, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+45eb6473199e,9E502030CA7E,"the inability to drive those cars specifically, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+adb3bb75e97f,9E502030CA7E,several legal issues to think about. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8284170d300c,9E502030CA7E,"The future is now, where cars are assential to everyday life, for some, cars are their life. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f1b00d0fd6a,9E502030CA7E,"Many people make their living off selling cars, advertising cars, building cars, designing cars, and even workers for car companies like Subaru, Toyota, Ford, Chevy, and more. On the radio, drivers hear tons of car sales and ads. If all the companies, all the advertisements, all the sales, all the new disigns, and every last car builder were to have to cope with driverless cars, many citizens would be out of a job. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a13469006c32,9E502030CA7E,The job market for cars would collapse and so would the economy leaving thousands unemployed. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1633a6226f30,9E502030CA7E,"Also, gas and oil would no longer have anywhere near as much value as it does now. Without oil and gas prices, even more poeple would be without jobs. Not to mention taxes would be brought up on everything else to try and keep the economy stable, but in reality, the rise in taxes would make everyone but the government looking for loose change. Especially people who have more importants things to pay for, like children and disabili ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf55d6229b35,9E502030CA7E,The inability to operate the cars would be even more an issue for people wiht disabilities ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c9ad4365a24b,9E502030CA7E,"Blind and deaf people can now at least get cars that can be modified to adjust to their ability, but as these driveless cars are just being made, it would take them even longer to modify them for the disabled to use. Even without a disability, the cars would be like taxis, so what about people with social anxiety? The driveless taxi causes them to leave their home and fetch one for themselves. Social anxiety is an illness and affects most people one way or another. Social anxiety can prevent someone from doing the simplest of things. Things that even a mere child could do. That's another problem with the cars, what if children run away in them? They have the ability to, but at this point, there's no law against it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3792ba38d77d,9E502030CA7E,"Along with the dovelopment of new cars, there would be NEED to be new laws to go with them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+496ce1cbedf9,9E502030CA7E,"If people think it's okay to drink and drive now, there will be even more of an issue if that person's not the one driving. If they're drunk, they could even fall asleep amd end up all the way across the country because they never told the car when to stop driving. Even when the operator of the car isn't drunk that could happen. Since there's no laws against it, they could just fall asleep while driving and cause accidents. If they think its okey to sleep, they will cirtainly think that texting, getting on social media, and watching videos is okay. They'll stop paying attention to the road, and could get seriously hurt. Getting hurt won't be the only bad thing to happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fc5eb4f50bc,9E502030CA7E,"Economy build up, people out of jobs, kids taking cars, disability mobility, legal documents, could all be avioded if the risk wasnt taken to make these driveless cars. They might be ffacinating and new now, but will it be worth it when the economy falls apart, when you lose your child, or get badly injured? Keep driverless cars off the road and keep moving forward in a REAL car to stay safe. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5e6f4dd1f401,9E6D1C0F5762,I think we should have a club in doing community service. Some of the students think it is a wonderful idea and some think it's a waste of there time. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f7f9aed67bdc,9E6D1C0F5762,I think we should have a club in doing so for many reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e7cf8f0194c1,9E6D1C0F5762,The first reason is because if we don't take care of our community then it will be a mess and no one would want to live here. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bbb67402cc2,9E6D1C0F5762,"The second reason is that if we have a clean community, children would want to play in a cleaner area instead of a messy one. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+12f0677e19ee,9E6D1C0F5762,The third reason is that if there is litter on the ground then it will attract mice and disgusting animals and no one I know likes mice running around every where they go. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d4e671cd8f0e,9E6D1C0F5762,The forth reason we should have a club is that if you want children to learn and if they don't know how to do something then students could tutor them and they will learn and be better at it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+67fe92a12ca0,9E6D1C0F5762,the fifth reason is that when people don't have help and they think no one wants to help them then our community would be filthy and abandoned. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cb4978b4183d,9E6D1C0F5762,These are all of the reasons why I think its a great idea to have a club to help the community and the people in it so it will be clean and the people would feel like they are cared and people would want to be their friend. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a1d4cfb1797c,9E924CD7FC66,I'm writing you this note to express my opinian wether or not to keep the Electoral College or to get rid of the Electoral College. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6ae48d75f315,9E924CD7FC66,no i'm not in favor of keeping the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2fffb7c8522d,9E924CD7FC66,it's unfair to a candidate that wins the popular vote but loss the election ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4b9bdf8facd,9E924CD7FC66,because the other candidate gained control of a state like texas with 34 electoral votes. Most people clear want this candidate better than the other but the candidate with the popular vote wouldn't win because the other candidnate would get states with more electoral votes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+004cf1ded753,9E924CD7FC66,sometimes the electors get confused on who to vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+79c70691d011,9E924CD7FC66,for i know if i had all that pressure on my i think i would get confused also from the pressure. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+498fcd485a2b,9E924CD7FC66,The Electoral College can also turn off potential voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c7328fb18fd,9E924CD7FC66,due to the fact that they hvae no hope of carrying their state. In other words people think they don't have a voice in the election because their vote really doesn't matter the vote that really matters is the Eletroral vote. Due to this reason less and less people vote these days. About i half of eligible voters voted in 2012's election as you can see there is a drop in voters. Most voters these days are people who want to expreess a political preference instead of people who think a single vote may decide who will win the election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b84c7e8e53d9,9E924CD7FC66,im not the only one that wanted to gte rid of the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4dcd2a65e835,9E924CD7FC66,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all wanted to get rid of the Electoral College. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c192b8a77907,9EADCECA2FB8,i think that students should have cell phones at passing time and lunch time ,Position,Adequate,,,
+769beeb3f25d,9EADCECA2FB8,so these students can relax and they don't have to get their phones taken away and they don't have a problem ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+948c855ac7d0,9EADCECA2FB8,"and they need to put their cell phones on vibrate or turned off but students don't want to put their phones in their lockers cause they get stolen which they get mad and they need to buy another one. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bad66c63baed,9EADCECA2FB8,students needs their phones so they can contact their family if some thing happens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+118cb4148b70,9EADCECA2FB8,or their family get robbed then how are you going to communicate. cell phones are okay ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+341a40b81e20,9EADCECA2FB8,but students are always texting during class when teachers are teaching. the cell phones company are starting to make new cell phones and people are starting to buy fancy phones like droid so are the students. cell phones are very cool to have and its kind of a lot of money to pay for those fancy phones. all students are buying cool phones cause they think they are cool cause other kids has cheap ones and telling them their phones are ugly. students are mean cause they could use someone's number and tell them awful stuff and would say the same thing what they say. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+48f2db0eeae8,9EADCECA2FB8,so i say lets not have cell phones at school that would be okay to me. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4546affe7e25,9EB66AB2C95F,I think students should be able to use there phones at school just not in class . Like in Policy 1 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+48373da4a9a2,9EB66AB2C95F,Students should use there phones because if something happen at school they can call someone and get help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+133297c06889,9EB66AB2C95F,"If students didn't get to use there phones in school and, something happened it would take to long for the student to go to the office. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a642c0d78439,9EB66AB2C95F,Also it would be nice to use your phone in school you can call your parents and tell them that your staying after school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+875981bc722f,9EB66AB2C95F,"One other reason they should let us use are phones is because the office get too crowed because people need to call home and parents and, sometimes people in the office tell you to get out because the office is to crowed sometimes you don't even get to call. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d148476f5fba,9EB66AB2C95F,Also they should let students use there phones is that they would be happy to use there phones at school and like coming to school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dec3c5e7da4a,9EB66AB2C95F,Also teachers would be able to use is too so its good for the whole school and everybody will be happy. So i think the principal should change the rules and let us use are phones. Also so students don't use them in class teachers should collect the students phones before class starts and give it back when class is over so students will not use them in class or just turn them off and show the teacher. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8997f17b8339,9EB66AB2C95F,Other reasons students should use there phones is because they can call somebody is an emergency happens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7fa9378907c,9EB66AB2C95F,Also they can call 911 is something really bad happens ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94e9aaac71b8,9EB66AB2C95F,Another thing is they will enjoy coming to school and have a smile ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a07df427f23e,9EB66AB2C95F,I think people will enjoy the new rule if it changed and be happy to use there phones in school. So i hope the principal will change the rule and let us use are phones during school but not in the classrooms. I think other students will be happy to be able to use there phones during school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+254de1fac752,9EB66AB2C95F,other might think wow they changed the rule and be happy to use there phones during school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de92608af631,9EB66AB2C95F,If the rule does change i think almost every students will be happy to use there phones. Also its good for parents because they can call there kids and tell them if they have to walk home or they are getting picked up today ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a8cc1d273303,9EBE86E9B255,"Driverless cars have always seemed like a likely thing for my generations lifetime. In fact, we thought we would be using flying cars by the time we were older. However, it is difficult to decide if driverless cars are a good thing or not. As far as the tests they have run go, the driverless cars seem safer than cars with drivers, and if the cars are fully automated they can reduse factors such as emotions, fatigue, and stress. However, technology can fail, which could lead to the cars being dangerous. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c15758481f7c,9EBE86E9B255,driverless cars are a good idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a084e97711c4,9EBE86E9B255,they can eliminate factors that can lead to humans crashing ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a16eea466a59,9EBE86E9B255,"they will make transportation easier for the standard person. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5c831795784e,9EBE86E9B255,"The computers that run the automated cars will not get fatigued, while many people fall asleep at the wheel and can kill others or themselves. Also, these cars will not be affected by emotions such as anger at other drivers, which can lead to aggressive driving and mistakes on the road. Plus, the cars will be able to see almost as much as their human counterparts as long as their radars, such as the LIDAR, are powerful and accurate enough to send an accurate reading back to the computerized vehicle. This will hopefully mean that the driverless cars will crash less because of factors such as emotions and fatigue. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+05723d5e18db,9EBE86E9B255,"The driverless cars would be more practical for some people because, if they can completely drive themselves, the passengers would not need a liscence or insurance like they would if they were driving the car themselves. However, the car would perform the same duties as a car they might own, unlike other forms of public-transportation. For example, busses cannot pick you up or drop you off at your home, so if the bus stop is not near to your house, it is not reasonable to ride the bus to work or other places. However, the taxi service would be able to pick you up no matter where you were. This would also be helpful if you were stranded somewhere and you needed help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5a06981052a6,9EBE86E9B255,they are much safer than the standard car with a human driver. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53a0e6fdf1e9,9EBE86E9B255,"Google's driverless cars ""have driven more than half a million miles without a crash."" This is an incredibly high mileage for never having a crash, and it shows that these cars are going to be incredibly safe when they are released to the public. Even thought the cars are still just being tested, they have never had a crash. Granted, the cars are not completely driverless, but the safety of the public is still the most important thing in the minds of many car manufacturing companies. These cars will prevent many people from being killed or injured in car accidents. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b2c48a8421dd,9EBE86E9B255,"All in all, driverless cars are going to be something that will be incredibly helpful in the future. They help to reduce the factors that affect drivers, they will be more a very practical form of transportation, and they seem to be, in general, safer than other vehicles. The advances that have been made in the automobile industry in the last 100 years are truly worthy of our praise. We have come from incredibly basic cars to cars that can drive themselves, for at least some of the time. However, when you look at all the progress that we have made, it forces you to think about what we will come up with next. Maybe, flying cars are not that far away from being a reality. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6b6c87eeb151,9F7080A8AC9E,"Most people would think of an electoral collage as a place rather than a system. The Electoral collage was a process that was create to help make voting easier when in fact it complicated things. I agree with with source 2 paragraph 14. paragraph 14 clear states ""It's official: The electoral collage is unfair, outdated, and irrational."" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6b2e9f9d7f5d,9F7080A8AC9E,i am completely convinced that the electoral collage is no longer necessary. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a7bbc19e9e3,9F7080A8AC9E,"There is a lot wrong with it, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f055de7198e,9F7080A8AC9E,"having to trust people to be honest and vote the right way, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+780f34743463,9F7080A8AC9E,discrediting a state because of it population. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4258146b21aa,9F7080A8AC9E,"With the electoral collage, you are to have state representatives. Your state is to take a majority vote and relay that information to the state representatives. Then the state representatives will then vote according to how the majority persuaded them to vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2a3e9f6db82,9F7080A8AC9E,However many things can go wrong with this ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+872b53f45839,9F7080A8AC9E,"they can simply vote their way or like paragraph 10 states, they can get confused and vote for the wrong candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4bd6f674ff36,9F7080A8AC9E,Due to the fact states have electoral votes based on size and population that one vote could cost the election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9bab3036d48,9F7080A8AC9E,the electoral vote are very unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bcc28e64187a,9F7080A8AC9E,everybody should have their own individual say so in elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41e64dbbab99,9F7080A8AC9E,Some of you may believe that this saves time ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8d9b16dfae97,9F7080A8AC9E,but in reality everybody has to vote anyway ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+fbc0c304a18d,9F7080A8AC9E,in fact it takes more time by deciding state representatives and so on and so forth. i really couldn't think of any other reasons you would want such a corrupt system like thus one. this system is obscured. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a28a0b143434,9F7080A8AC9E,i personally believe this system is outdated. i doubt this system even worked well in the old days. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+51d890d09fcb,9F71393177F9,"I think that bring your phone to school and using them at lunch, break and other free times is a good idea. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+20c3200fe163,9F71393177F9,Because as long as they turn it off at the end of the time giving then there should be no problem. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf452f75173f,9F71393177F9,I know you probably think that people would go behind your back and leave there phones on ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dac090c20651,9F71393177F9,but if they do and they get caught they should get in trouble for it. I really don't see a problem with taken your phone to school and using it at free time. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b25c271c6ad3,9F71393177F9,"Also, if they don't obey the rules then they can pay the consequences. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1320767fe7bf,9F71393177F9,Using phones at school is not no big deal if you think about it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7b3ee4dcb13b,9F71393177F9,"Because we have eight hour in school and I think it is right if you let us use it when free time is giving to us, but not during class time. I know school means a lot but i still think we should get a free time and let us check our phones. School is not a joke, it is important i know that, but i bet you over half of the school checks there phones when they can. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71dd61755589,9F71393177F9,"In all, i think students should be allowed to use there phones when they have free time. Education is very important, but remember we have eight hours in school and I don't see any problem checking them at lunch, break or free time. i don't think its right sneaking behind your back and people trying to check there phone so instead of them going behind your back the free time giving to them they can check it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+951ba6a039a7,9FA7B30CC4D1,Community Service is a really good way to help from polluting the earth. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2bceb1f2b17d,9FA7B30CC4D1,some people may think Community Service takes to much time up for then ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f992cdc511e9,9FA7B30CC4D1,but it is the right thing to do to help. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+79a38849003a,9FA7B30CC4D1,Community Service can help animals from going extinct ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d4ec70712bf,9FA7B30CC4D1,"now since the oil spill has happened it has been killing most of our animals. Most of the animals in the sea water we need for food. If i had to do Community Service , i would do Community Service to help from polluting the earth and from killing animals. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0c7b05386d2,9FA7B30CC4D1,Some friends and family may not care for community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+994c703e0dc0,9FA7B30CC4D1,"but its the way to help the earth. Earth is where we live at , with out it what would we be? Human people wouldn't exist with out earth ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+835ea6647172,9FA7B30CC4D1,we need to have Community Service! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+761777b1b132,9FC7CB71EF7B,"Autonomous cars is a big deal for people in this time of tecnoligy.
+
+Also there is people that do not think briveles cars are not safe do be in the road ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+65192ef04311,9FC7CB71EF7B,Me personaly think that cars should not be produce by conpanyes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ef550591adff,9FC7CB71EF7B,the car has a lot of bad functions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56e1f5ca9f11,9FC7CB71EF7B,"The reaoson that the car has a lot of problems becouse it is program to follow all the laws, which could couse many asidents. One of the reasons is that not every peorson is goin to have a driverlees car.
+
+That couses a problem between the people becouse people do not follow the rules all the time and aoutonomous cars will go exacli at the speed limit or top if some one is crosing the road. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9286f4ee2ce2,9FC7CB71EF7B,"the person that is in the driveless car can fall a sleep, and there could be something that the car can not do, and the owner wont react on time to take control and it could couse a big acident or evn the deth of many peple ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+461335b89540,9FC7CB71EF7B,Theose are some of the reasons why i do not think driverless cars should be produce becouse the car is not safe enought to be driving in the road and for the safti of other cevilians. What do you think? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dc438f5dfd3f,9FCA0338E29B,"Do you have a cell phone? It is nice to have, isn't it? You can do so many things with your cell phone like getting on the internet, getting in touch with friends, or keeping track of stuff. Well all these things could help during school ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+93f800a627d6,9FCA0338E29B,"I'm not saying you should let us have it out during class, but in between class periods or during lunch. It would be a big help to us and you. By that I mean our education. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+1eb17ebfb2ba,9FCA0338E29B,"If you allowed us to take our phones out in between classes, we cold swiftly study for a quiz or exam we had in an upcoming period. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f9d32ff4b38,9FCA0338E29B,This would help you in our school test score rating overall. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6be3cb0a50cf,9FCA0338E29B,"When we are in school for so long, we students tend to get bored and so we start talking then the teacher gets mad because we are to loud or we are talking while he/she is talking. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51f1cc71e21b,9FCA0338E29B,A way to prevent that is to let us have our phones out during lunch so we can talk to our friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f1adfd4b4e9,9FCA0338E29B,"You might say we get to talk to our friends all the time. I'm talking about the people we don't sit with at lunch cause ya'll don't let us sit any where we want. So we could text or talk to the people across the lunch room. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd310f518ac9,9FCA0338E29B,"In our phones we have note pads, calendars, calculators, and other stuff we could use for school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56564e73d4c3,9FCA0338E29B,we could keep up with notes taken in class or set an alarm for a day we have test. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+214da3ec4d77,9FCA0338E29B,I cant say we would not take advantage of this priviledge cause some people will. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+64739d4512e8,9FDB425F1FE9,"When the Constitution of the United States was written our founding fathers decided on an Electoral College as the way to ellect the president instead of a direct vote. The Electoral College is a process that makes a compromise between the popular vote of the citizens and the Congressional vote. When citizens vote for president they are actually voting for a member of the Electoral College that is going to select their president, rather than the citizens voting for the president themselves. The Electoral College is made of 538 electors, the number of electors from each state varies depending on the states Congressional delegation. Washington D.C. is counted as a state for this process and alloted only three electors. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+332e6084e97b,9FDB425F1FE9,The electoral college should be kept in use ,Position,Effective,,,
+f56d558682df,9FDB425F1FE9,t simplifies the outcome ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4b9e9e1648a7,9FDB425F1FE9,"allocates more power to the larger states. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+f425ef2f4a33,9FDB425F1FE9,"When voting with a popular vote system a debate over the outcome of the vote is very likely and will probably cause some constroversy. When the votes form the electoral college are counted the margin of victory is much higher which simplifies the result of the poll. During the election of 2012 Obama only recieved 51.3 percent of the vote, however he won the vote of the electoral college with an astounding 61.7 percent, a increase in the margin of victory by 10.4 percent. With this wide of a margin of victory a dispute over the victor of the presidential election is unlikely and  almost impossible to argue against. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+375b918ce812,9FDB425F1FE9,"Some might argue that the Electoral College is flawed because electors can choose not to vote for their canidate. It is true that this has happened in the past, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+db5da708ce5e,9FDB425F1FE9,"""in 1960, segregationist in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded on replacing the Democratc electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy."" P.11. If this happened the popular vote for Kennedy would have gone to his adversaries instead. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+15fcc582250f,9FDB425F1FE9,It is true that electors can choose not to vote for the canidate they pledged to and that this has happened in the past however the electors rarely betray their party's nominee and a tie in the electoral vote is extreamly unelikely. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b941a36ab55a,9FDB425F1FE9,"Additionally, the Electoral College sould be kept in today's democracy because is allocates power to the larger states ",Claim,Effective,,,
+807ec3be0425,9FDB425F1FE9,"It only makes sense that the larger states with a larger population should get more of a say in their government, and recieve more electoral votes than a small state with fewer people. With this system political infulence is restored to the larger states making the canidates focuss on the more populous areas. More power to the more populous states also means that run-off elections are avoided. In 1992 and in 1968 run-off elections were avoided due to the use of the Electoral College; ""Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority of the Electoral College"" P.22. A run-off election extreamly complicates the election process however the chance of this happening is greatly reduced when using the Electoral College which almost always produces a clear winner. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+29e2edc9e4fb,9FDB425F1FE9,The electoral college should be kept in use because it simplifies the outcome and allocates more power to the larger states. The Electoral College avoids the outcome of a run-off election. It also greatly reduces the chance of a dispute between the victor. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+7c20a3448098,9FDB425F1FE9,Most people do not like the Electoral College because they are not directly voting for their canidate ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6844c8070156,9FDB425F1FE9,however many people fail to realize hat it is rare for an elector to betray his nominee. Electors rarely betray their canidate because they are chosen by the canidates party or the canidate themself. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5d337ede266b,9FE339BCFE2C,There has been much controversy over whether or not we should keep the Electoral College or have it removed and vote on the president based on popular vote. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+86d24b2b4c38,9FE339BCFE2C,I believe the best decision is to change to an election by popular vote for the President of the United States. ,Position,Effective,,,
+49631e975a37,9FE339BCFE2C,"If the system would change, people would feel like their votes actually matter more then they do now.  ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c01f2472f0b4,9FE339BCFE2C,They wouldn't have to worry about the electors flipping sides. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e7d64d9c9be2,9FE339BCFE2C,"Some people though, do say that the way the election is now is completely fair in the case of votes are based on population. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f7429e9414e9,9FE339BCFE2C,"To begin with, if the Electoral College was to be taken out of use, more people would feel like their vote matters. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8add2f8a3ea0,9FE339BCFE2C,"Although you may think you are voting for your choice of president, you are not.  As of now, when you cast your vote, you are actually just voting for your candidate's electors, as said in ""What Is the Electoral College"".  In the 2000 campaign, voters in seventeen states didn't have a chance to see the candidates at all.  Those candidates went mainly to the ""swing"" states, or states that were not certain on who they would be voting for.  The states unvisited, such as Rhode Island and South Carolina, were passed over because the candidates knew they would or wouldn't have their vote no matter what.  The ones who questioned their vote did not have the chance to see either candidate in their state.  In, ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"", the Romney and Obama election is mentioned.  It brings up the fact that Romney knew that throughout the South, he was going to get their vote.  He realized that there was no need to go there because he didn't need anymore popularity in the South because he had already gained their electoral votes.  Those who opposed Romney in the southern states felt that their votes would not matter because majority already knew they were voting for Romney.  If the system were to change, which I believe it should, more people would feel their votes mattered no matter what state they were in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fa2c02f29a40,9FE339BCFE2C,"In addition to feeling like your vote matters, people never know if the electors would flip their desicions. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6ee77ff2b5d1,9FE339BCFE2C,"The slate of electors is not picked by the people.  It is said in, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid jdefenses of the system are wrong"", that sometimes the state conventions, the party's central committee, or the presidential candidates themselves choose who will be their electors.  That being said, you don't know whether or not the electors will follow your choice of president or not.  For example, in 1960, some electors refused to vote for their party's candidate and they chose whomever they wanted. If we were to switch the way things are now, that would not happen.  A poll taken in 2000 called the Gallup poll, showed that over 60% of voters prefered a direct election rather then the kind we have now.  This took place when Al Gore recieved the popular vote, but lost the electoral votes.  You can see that the current system has its flaws. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+669527f604b3,9FE339BCFE2C,Many people say that it is fair for all states because of their amount of electoral votes.  ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+863cf7a75331,9FE339BCFE2C,"For example, in ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"", Florida, which has a much larger population than Wyoming, recieved 29 electoral votes for Obama while Wyoming only had 3 electoral votes.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+22fdcd95287f,9FE339BCFE2C,"This, at the same time though, makes candidates want to only go to the larger states to try to get their votes.  The smaller states once again feel left out and unappreciated. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+578e24e38a2b,9FE339BCFE2C,"In conclusion, I strongly feel that we need to change to an election by popular vote.  Above all, it is more fair to the people.  Citizens would feel that their votes matter more than they do now.  People wouldn't have to be worried about if the electors would flip on what they had voted for.  Although some say its is absolutely fair throughout all the states, there are still the set backs that come along with keeping an Electoral College.  I agree with former presidents, Nixon and Carter, that we need to abolish the Electoral College.  All of these reasons show you the problems there are with the current system of electing our President and I know you will agree ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1e6939e8eda8,A0181C244D0D,"On the matter of ""driverless cars"", I would advocate for their developement. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+715e7cd2eabd,A0181C244D0D,These cars are the technology of the future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7d4523d12886,A0181C244D0D,"They are bringing this civilization closer and closer to a new level of technological advancement. This advancement would not only create a mammoth break through in modern day technology, but would also change the way we live our day to day lives as a worldwide culture ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3f389660672,A0181C244D0D,Despite this product being a bit more of a want than a necessity for the time being ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b379dbda45e6,A0181C244D0D,I believe that they should continue to be improved and developed. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d47a972a1cba,A0181C244D0D,"Driverless cars have been the seemingly unattainable, next level of fantastic futuristic technology for many people for decades now. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18c82f647b94,A0181C244D0D,"In the 1950s, General Motors created the first car that could drive without a human at the wheel. AT that time, it would have been difficult to believe that such technology of a car that could drive itself with no type of polarized track below it would have been possible. Three decades later in the 1980s, the first speed sensors had been placed in wheels in order to provide drivers with an heightened break accuracy. Not even ten years later, those same sensors had become so advanced as to now provide drivers with the added safety of a car who could respond to the danger of out-of-control skidding. Furthermore, by the 2000s, radars that at one point had costed millions, could be found in your regular old run-of-the-mill car for your local dealer ship, ready for the purchase of any regular civillian. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0c0a2dacb33d,A0181C244D0D,"WIth all of this improvement in a car's safety and reliability, not only can countless lives be saved on the road with this technology, but the more it is improved upon, the less room there is for the common human error in driving, which unfortunately leads to thousands of lives being lost yearly to traffic accidents. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9660eb30e070,A0181C244D0D,"While the current ""driverless"" cars still require some human skills when travelling through complex road conditions, with continuing developement, eventually the accuracy of the computers' driving skills will rival that of human intelligence. This can be predicted by looking at the accuracy and speed of reaction when looking at an automated calculator in comparison to a human arithmatic. As time has progress, so has technology up to the point where it surpasses human intelligence and reaction speed, and in the case of these new cars, would make it generally safer for the extremely accurate computers to do the driving, rather than humans, who would make a great many more faults when it comes to driving safely and accurately ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+157eff372fb1,A0181C244D0D,"The only major issue that could arise is the problematic moment in which a ""driverless"" car's system would break. This would leave not only the passenger in the car in danger depending on the severity of the car failure, but it would also leave the other communters on the road in danger as well. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+988305612350,A0181C244D0D,"
+In conclusion, if these ""driverless"" cars are allowed to continue to be tested and improved upon, countless lives will be saved and human efficiency will increase. As this fantastic technology is improved upon, the negative aspects of trial and error, restrictive laws, and cost will only decrease. As for the future, human culture as we know it will change to alot this new technological enhancement into our everday lives, and in the process, potentially save thousands of individuals with ever purchase of a new ""smart"" car. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4eb3e3f0e130,A0215B1294B9,"
+I am fully aware you probably think it is better for the school to not have cell phones during school hours. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a311f965aa34,A0215B1294B9,But I have reason to say that students should be able to have use in there phone during lunch periods and other free times but yet to have it off during class. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bde5c51b7589,A0215B1294B9,The reason for this is because I tend to get bored during lunch time ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5893b3353fd3,A0215B1294B9,if I have absolutely nothing to do maybe I could just listen to music on my phone or to text a friend that is away. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f30d6e9e39f5,A0215B1294B9,"As well as if I needed to talk to my mom I could call her for something important to me, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1705109ff8c6,A0215B1294B9,"I say important to me because If I asked the people in the office if I could use the phone to ask my mom or a parent something, and did not tell them why because it was a personal question, they would normally say ""no"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94cf0f224491,A0215B1294B9,I really don't see what is wrong with having a phone out during the time we have free. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e637ebc7c82d,A0215B1294B9,"Kids do it either way, whether the teachers say yes or no, But kids sometimes get there phone look-in away. There for, I say we should be able to have use of a cell phone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ea5ab3d8fa8,A0215B1294B9,Hopefully it would change your mind about this policy. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+341681821866,A10226201F3A,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Schools are offering distance learning as an option for students. I think they should offer it to students. Specially High School students. I have some reasons on why they should be able to. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a3e8ebc1c5cf,A10226201F3A,Students would be able to focus more if their home. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c3952b2db77,A10226201F3A,They would have a less chance of getting distracted by anyone. It would be easier for them to learn more and better their self at knowing more information than they would at school learning from a teachers pace. Being able to learn at your own pace would be great for students. They would learn the information better. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21652457845e,A10226201F3A,It would better their chances of graduating. More students would actually do their work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b78b737a3eb,A10226201F3A,"They would actually do way better doing it at home, because they wouldn't get detracted by anyone that's in the hallway or anyone that in their classroom. The classroom can be a huge distracted to students with everything going on it would be hard for them to get any work done for to even be able to learn everything their suppose to learn. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df396fa159d8,A10226201F3A,Giving students that option would benefit them a lot. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5e344c9a21a3,A10226201F3A,You have to think about it. If students don't do their work at school it's because their either messing around playing or their not able to focus with others around them. So letting them get the option to learn at home would be great for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b56c93646e0,A10226201F3A,Some would say that they disagree with letting students be able to learn from home is a bad idea ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6ca40f914002,A10226201F3A,You have to think about what's best for students. What would help them succeed in life. What would make them want to better their future. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8007c14a30ac,A10226201F3A,They ask if we think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. I think they should give the students the opportunity to want to better their future by letting from learn from home. There is a lot of students that want to learn it's just sometimes hard for them. So they should allow them to do so and see how many would succeed and improve a lot more.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+125ff771e168,A103E161D9C7,"Students should not be required to perform community service in order to pass a class or grade. Community service should not be a requirement, ",Position,Effective,,,
+d4260d30219c,A103E161D9C7,"because community service is only useful if the person does it with enthusiasm. Otherwise, it becomes a chore instead of a personal choice to do the right thing. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1957fa832b5c,A103E161D9C7,"Also if somebody does, for example, cleaning up the beach as a community service project, they will likely miss trash and litter. This would be due to a lack of enthusiasm, and the person did not really contribute to society. So it is a lose-lose situation to be in, the kids complain that it eats up their time and the job does not get done. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4413e62a9298,A103E161D9C7,"However, a student that CHOSE to perform community service, IS usually getting the job done, and done right. If the same student was REQUIRED to do community service, he would make mistakes and would get the job done, but NOT right. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73118c4e4983,A103E161D9C7,"There is many solutions to getting students involved with community service. One, for example, is to give extra credit to those that CHOOSE to do community service. Another possible way is to promote using flyers in hope someone will look at it and say something like ""Hey, this beach really is messy, and I can help"". So ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+752ad4997c1c,A103E161D9C7,there are other options than to REQUIRE community service hours. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9430af95d73a,A103E161D9C7,"Okay, to recap, no community service requirements, because to some kids it will be a ""chore"" and won't get done right. Community service is good, but if it is not required the job will get done right. There are other options than to require community service, such as promoting and extra credit. So you should listen so this letter so doing community service is a win-win situation. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c22d801bc9b5,A11991A7C4CE,the Electoral College is very helpful and is needed more than people think. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00e20162fc05,A11991A7C4CE,The Electoral College is helpful in three ways: ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8f8f9ca48406,A11991A7C4CE,"there is a certainty of outcome in the votes, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d1730e8d833,A11991A7C4CE,"two types of states to persuade, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7cc8fc390ea,A11991A7C4CE,helpful to avoid run-off elctions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d2623304c6f,A11991A7C4CE,The Electoral College helps keep the certainty of outcome in the votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84e662cfc98f,A11991A7C4CE,"""The Electoral College is widly regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the canadidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.""
+
+source three:
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7e34e4838694,A11991A7C4CE,The Elctoral College also gives the candidates a second chance at winning the election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa25e61259fb,A11991A7C4CE,"Although someone won the popular vote portion of the election, they [the canidate] could still lose the election at the electoral portion. The electoral portion of the election is where the elected representatives go and vote for the president again and have a final deciding vote. Even with this prestegous process sometimes there are instenses were the ""underdog"" wins the electoral votes and
+
+NOT
+
+the popular votes. Although these instenses are little to non-exsitent.
+
+""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that is rarely betrayed)... [;however,] it is entirely possible that the winer of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. Yet that as happened very rarley. It happened in2000, when Gore had more popukar votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888.""
+
+source three:
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a50f3c31717b,A11991A7C4CE,"With two types of states, swing states and big states, the candidate can get wrapped up in trying to get the most votes in one particular type of state,-typically big states- they dont notice how the oppisite type of state could benefit them in the long run. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d68df65d8aca,A11991A7C4CE,"""The winner take-all-method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates - as we saw in [2012's] election - to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states...""
+
+""They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average (and for the further reason that they will recieve the most information and attention from the candidates0, and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.""
+
+source three:
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner
+
+On the other side of this arguement would be the big states (Texas, Califrnia, Florida, etc.) who usally vote the same party every election.
+
+""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balnce that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mak-apportionmentof the Senate decreed in the Consitution...""
+
+""So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential campiagns than a small state does...""
+
+source three:
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21771302c291,A11991A7C4CE,Th Electoral College helps aviod run-off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31768249e82e,A11991A7C4CE,"""The Electoral College aviods the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a mojority of the votes cast.""
+
+""There is a pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a mojority of the votes cast' that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner.""
+
+source three:
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+118d3de811b5,A11991A7C4CE,"In conclusion, we need the Electoral College to help us with three things: one; provide a certainty of outcome in the votes, two; two types of states, and three; helpful to aviod run-off elctions. Prsonally, this is the only logical solution to our nation's voting system. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+27eae0c453e9,A1274B901F55,I think students should have to do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0694aad3ab03,A1274B901F55,because if they want the points to go to the next grade or school they need to do community service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0aaf47956b04,A1274B901F55,For me community service is a good way to show kids how to work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac57b02ee7a3,A1274B901F55,"I think the required time for community service is twenty-four hours. I think that community service can be done anywhere even in fast food restaurants such as Burger King, McDonald's, Wendy's, or KFC, and all the other fat food restaurants, but the point is not about fast food restaurants, the point is that i think that community service could be done anywhere if they let you. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e6e458921f1,A1274B901F55,"If you want kids to have to do community service then they should do it and if they don't want to then that's their problem because they have to earn the hours and the points, and if you don't want to make us take community service then we have to make up for it in high school. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+098f9530b0ce,A1274B901F55,"I have not yet done my community service because i haven't had time to do it but i am planning to do it in these next few months, but my problem is that i don't know what i should do to gain the points. I was thinking i should do my community service, and get the required points at .... well like i said i don't really know where i am going to do it, but ill think about it really hard, but my goal is when i do find out what i am going to do i am going to get the points and hours in a week and a half or less. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6e9e57729152,A135E9280900,There has been a lot of controversy on weather to require all children of SCHOOL_NAME to perform community service ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+32c254c4e921,A135E9280900,and although this would be good in some ways this would be worse for many reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fefa0cdf8f1b,A135E9280900,"because it lessens the time for extra curricular activities, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ae62a51000e6,A135E9280900,makes community service seem as it is work rather than something you chose to do ,Claim,Effective,,,
+07dedea31fb8,A135E9280900,and because it takes time away from homework and other school work we are required to perform at home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+58ffb88fe896,A135E9280900,My first reason is that forcing children to work on community service is that it takes time away from extra curricular activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a09ee1af3d75,A135E9280900,"It's a common known fact that America has problems with obesity. Making kids do community service would definitely take time off of children's clock that they could be doing active activities like working out or playing a sport. This would increase obesity rates in America even more, causing the life span of children in this Country to shrink. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c81ae9a8d8d8,A135E9280900,"My second point is that forcing children to do community service makes it seem more like work, rather than if you didn't it would seem like something you do for fun, like a hobby. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+709bdd0f7d40,A135E9280900,"Community service is something that should be done because kids want to help other kids, the environment or those who need help. This wouldn't only make the amount of work done plummet, but also the quality of the work. If a kid is performing community service and is really enjoying himself, he is much more likely going to get a lot done and it is going to be very good quality work. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+99f0ab6e4263,A135E9280900,"My third, and final point is that forcing children to perform community service is taking time away from children's school work or studying at home. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+31fde76182fa,A135E9280900,"There is no doubt that children in this very room that I'm writing this paper in are struggling to pass the 8th grade. Forcing them to do community service would only increase the number of failing students at SCHOOL_NAME. This would not only be problematic for the children that are failing, but would also hurt this schools' reputation of having good academic program. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d90381a1b4de,A135E9280900,"In conclusion forcing children to perform community service would be problematic for three reasons, because it lessens the time for extra curricular activities, makes community service seem as it is work rather than something you chose to do and because it takes time away from homework and other school work we are required to perform at home. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e79421642d76,A138DF27F153,I consider that policy 1 is above par because of numerous reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+84dbef8becd8,A138DF27F153,Most students need their cell phone so their family and friends can contact them when needed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+215d7defda5a,A138DF27F153,"Some kids need their phone for the internet, like if their doing some kind of project that involves research then they'll need it. Most kids need to call their parents after school to let them know where their going to be after school, you never know what could happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76664dc4e814,A138DF27F153,Policy 2 is not the best choice because a lot of children are stubborn and not allowing phones to be on campus is just going to make them want to bring them even more ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c161a404f6e4,A138DF27F153,Some students are followers so if they see their friend bringing a cell phone to school then their eventually going to bring one too ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf13462423a0,A138DF27F153,"I suggest you go with policy number 2 unless you want to hear complaints from angry parents, choose believe. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+178abde55b8a,A148C659E98B,I have been really good this quarter and other students would like to do sports or some type of activity this year but they have a C average. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7abb0ad7850d,A148C659E98B,I think we should be able to do sports or activity's even though we have a C average instead of a B average. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+23265ce61741,A148C659E98B,But I think it is a good reason why it has to be a B average it's because if u have a B or below than a B u can get kicked off the team or your activity. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+1ede0a833866,A148C659E98B,I think we should all be able to do activity's even though are grade is bad and is below a B average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9334437d2b1c,A148C659E98B,Is because we can stay on the team and still bring are grades up instead of them like kicking us off the team just because are grades are below a B average. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+093b9070f6e0,A148C659E98B,we should not be able to do sports in less we have at least a B average or an A average. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+baf60073ed64,A148C659E98B,We should be able to do activity's no matter what the principal says it is the coaches place to say if we can or can not be on the team because of our grade's being low. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a1d43c5ef13,A148C659E98B,they should pick the straight A or straight B students because they know that they will keep there grade up the whole school year. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+682d1e337c4e,A148C659E98B,"But they might get at least a
+
+B- or an A-. Like for example lets say they got an F and the next day they brung up that F to a B. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+95830e1bddf8,A148C659E98B,You can also quit if you know you have a bad grade and then when you bring that grade back up you can go do that sport or activity again. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91b62ddf4637,A15649448050,"In the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" in NASA they are arguing and discussing what or who made the face. Some NASA people are thinking that the face was made naturaly. Others are saying that aliens used rocks and other things to create it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+224b23171d91,A15649448050,The face on Mars is probaly naturally made ,Position,Adequate,,,
+08a241bd6855,A15649448050,"if you look at the images in the beginnig of the article, it has three different dates. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2658a1e03124,A15649448050,"f you look at the first one, 1976, you can see the face clearly. In 1998, the face is starting to get a little blery. Now at 2001, you barely see the face, in fact there is not a face anyone.
+
+If this face was man-made or made by aliens, the shouldn't the face be more clearly in 1976. If man did make this face, how would they get there in the first place. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b7d83528c49,A15649448050,"The face on Mars would be naturally made, cause no human or alien could make this. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bd723e09ce9e,A157D4491C7E,I want to take the time to speak my mind and said whats wrong with the clectoral college.  ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6eb9dc7bd015,A157D4491C7E,"The electoral college is a process, not a place that what i've read. The founding fathers established it in the constitution between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizen. The electoral college consists of 538 elctors. a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40ce63009089,A157D4491C7E,"Under the electoral collage system, votets vote not for the prisident, but for slate of elector who there elect the presient ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c9ea9dc01a6b,A157D4491C7E,he single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35dd5ad85945,A157D4491C7E,the amercan people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest electoin crisis in a century. consider that state legislatures are technically resonsible for picking electors and those electors could always defy the will of the people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fed419eda507,A157D4491C7E,"each state casts only one vote, the single  representative from wyoming, representing 500,000 voters,would have as much say 55 representatives from california, who represent 35 millon votes. that  many voters vote one party for president and another for congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6df56e2752f,A157D4491C7E,"the electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president  taht ought to be overruled by declaring  the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ced4f36bcd9,A15A51E83757,I am writing to you to argue in favor of changing the Electoral vote to election by popular vote for the president of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+37a53c3447ad,A15A51E83757,"Supporting the opposite side of this argument,
+
+Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , by Richard A. Posner. Just as it is said, he simply states and explains five major reasons why he and many other believe that this method should remain being used. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9ed7fc7ad57c,A15A51E83757,"Although I strongly believe that the Electoral College should be discontinued, I do resspect the other side's opinions and mean no disrepect. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1776d00a62f1,A15A51E83757,"To begin this argument, the Electoral College is a process established by the Founding Fathers in the Constitution. It compromises the election of the President by a vote in Congress ang election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Ther are 538 electors in the Electoral College, and only a majority of 270 votes are needed to win the election. Every candidate that is running for the President has there own group of electors, which are chosen by that candidate's political party. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01bfd965a2eb,A15A51E83757,This method even lost the presidency vote according to a Gallup poll in 2000. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0608c6e7f6dd,A15A51E83757,"The main reason many others and I are against this method is this; citizen voters vote not for the actual president of the United States, but for a slate of electors, which actual do the real voting and electing of the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0987e391698a,A15A51E83757,there are numerous different groups that even pick the electors in the first place ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11d73769dd27,A15A51E83757,"Overall, there are plenty of other reasons that this method is unjust and unreasonable, but it simply could not all fit in one letter. I do hope that you take this concern very seriously and do your best to make the change you desire. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+64abb6284aac,A20D6E252177,"You seriously need to change this whole ""Electoral College"" voting system. It's not right and not accurate. Wouldn't it be fair if the people had a say in this? We..The People? ",Position,Adequate,,,
+46985b5b1399,A20D6E252177,Popular vote definetly makes more sense in this case. It's proven that an electoral vote would sometimes end in a tie ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71496600a187,A20D6E252177,"resulting in a ""You're President, You're Vice President"" scenario. No one wants to go through a tie cause the election would go to the House of Representatives and then they would decide who is who. That's pretty stupid...if I do say so myself.
+
+Now if the people, us, had a say in this...Then we'd defiently have a winner. No ties, No mistakes, No nothing. Just a plain, clean winner. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1aada543b9c3,A20D6E252177,"The electoral college is unfair to voters to be honest. The electoral college is irrational, unfair, outdated and annoying. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2aa70e8b3616,A20D6E252177,"No one uses it anymore. Due to it being completely unfair to citizens and states alike. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8fc82612f353,A20D6E252177,"The Electoral College rule says ""It requires a presidential canidate to trans-regianl appeal."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+53675c4255f0,A20D6E252177,"Don't you think we know that? Then there's the fact that only ""Big States"" have a say, what about the smaller ones? There are people there too you know. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9805a584de22,A20D6E252177,"The Electoral College does avoid the problem of ""Run-Off Elections"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7fb03a95447d,A20D6E252177,but that doesn't help the fact that we should all have a say. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+aa2d2a4a6026,A20D6E252177,"Well, Nevertheless, you can understand why im so fed up with this ""Electoral College"" nonsense. It's stupid, outdated, and unfair.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+782026724ee9,A2237589F0FE,I personally don't think it is a very good idea to make it where kids with C average grades cant play sports and do other activities they like after school. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bc0c440c975e,A2237589F0FE,"A C is still a passing grade, and even a D is a passing grade. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4b608b69637,A2237589F0FE,There are many people in college that I know who have C' s and they are doing great. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4ea773efa122,A2237589F0FE,If you made it to where kids with C grades couldn't play sports it would may make some of them try a little bit harder ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+17953b21758e,A2237589F0FE,it may also make some just give up and not even try to do sports and after school activities. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5aa68fc73a03,A2237589F0FE,"If the school did set this rule up then there would probably only be nine or ten kids that would actually be involved in the activities themselves. I said earlier that a D is still a passing grade, and it is. I mean it definitely isn't best passing grade, but it is better than an F. F stands for fail. This rule they could put up is basically saying ""if your not a straight A student, then you cant do anything fun"".
+
+Now this is all just my opinion on it all, there are a lot of facts involved to of what it would do to the school and its community though. Like it is said, many students have a grade C average. When I say many I mean a lot! I am also one of those students who has a grade C average so that's puts me on the side of not liking this idea ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47e863eba369,A2237589F0FE,many straight A students wouldn't like this idea either. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+101303f86614,A2237589F0FE,"The reason I say that many straight A students wouldn't like this idea is because they would probably seem to be labeled as nerd's even more than they already, dumbly enough, are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+16b3c00839fd,A2237589F0FE,"With kids having to have a B average and over all these years you would just have to have a C average, it would just mess everything up ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e50f823067e0,A2237589F0FE,"After school sports and activities shouldn't have to be ""hard"" to get into, and this idea would make it really hard. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec4ec8865802,A2237589F0FE,"That's just it, it would be a bad idea to make C average graded kids not able to play sports. There are many kids who have a C average and that is a perfectly good passing grade. What would be the actual point to doing this anyway? School is hard enough for it is the twenty first century, and making it even harder and more stressful would be bad. To sum it all up, making kids with C average grades not able to play sports is a terrible idea.
+
+Thank you for your time! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c2b31e4822af,A23FF67A91B5,he election is coming up soon and so is voting. The Electoral College and the popular vote get to select the president of the United States every year. I want this year to be a little different ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d31f772e39df,A23FF67A91B5,This year I would like to see only the Electoral College vote for the president ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ebb6ec811c32,A23FF67A91B5,"The Electoral College knows all about thinking if the president is good enough for the country, and if he can be a good role model, or also a commander in chief. That is the reason why I would like to keep the Electoral College ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+959b7774a769,A23FF67A91B5,"For example there are two candidates fighting to be president and it's time to vote and the Electoral College might look over  to see if the president looks like he can keep his promise to keep the coutnry safe, to make this a better country or not . That's what they look for in a president. That's the reason wwhy we should keep the Electoral College ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c896a3e5020,A23FF67A91B5,"When the citizens want to vote for the president as well, they think of the same thing, if he's good enough for our country, and if he is going to keep us safe. The Electoral College knows a lot about picking the right president and they've been doing it for a long time ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2615124ed37,A23FF67A91B5,"""The Electoral College consits of 538 electors and a  majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. That's enough electors to vote wether or not the president should be this person or that person ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fdc7b870ad0a,A272AD6BD9AF,my name is STUDENT_NAME and I have notice you have two policies for all of us students here at the school ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+d84edc148eb8,A272AD6BD9AF,"So I have came to give you my opinion on what we should do, and that is, policy 1. To me policy 1 is better ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4cd498ee41d5,A272AD6BD9AF,"because if the office can't get in contact with any parent/gaurdian about one us students having an emergency about something or either to get a ride, it wouldn't make sense to take the phone away right? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+931428b846cb,A272AD6BD9AF,"If you can't get in contact with the hospital, because a student can't breath wouldn't it make sense to just use our phone during free time if that happened to let them know, because you are usually not out during free time and if that happens it could be too late to rush the student to the hospital if we have to walk or run a long way to just get to your office or the front office to let someone know that, "" hey there's a student across the other end of the school that is not breathing, then you would have to ruin all the way down to make sure so it would be to late for them to come right? Instead of just letting a student call then the ambulance would be here already and it wouldn't take forever ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4dc2a03c96b,A272AD6BD9AF,"If we have to contact our parents to let them know that we are going to be gone and miss the bus, because of school activity then we have to let them know. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+923eda75cf1a,A272AD6BD9AF,"So think about it. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+508e4c847336,A279E174CA64,"Many students argue that community service is nothing that requires them, but many adults and some students feel it is an important part of our world, and it's an activity that everyone can participate in. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+2724e90c5862,A279E174CA64,"Everyone needs to help change the world, and I agree that community service is a big deed that students should be taking a part of, ",Position,Effective,,,
+3c358b467d54,A279E174CA64,a lot of students claim they don't have enough time. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d33ce63c3f94,A279E174CA64,"Doing little things like walking your neighbors dog, or help babysit your cousins is enough for students who have extracurricular activities, and boat loads of homework. Many students do participate in community service, and many also do extracurricular activities. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cd11ad1dee31,A279E174CA64,"The main reason students say that they cannot participate in community services is because they play sports, or are on the dance team, or in English festival. They participate in something extracurricular, therefore they don't have the time between games and practices to balance out there schedule and their grades. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+15ec50371a34,A279E174CA64,"The students grades are another important reason to either decide if or if you cannot participate in community services, let alone extracurricular activities. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c87013800d28,A279E174CA64,. I think the school should have a sign up sheet which requires every student to sign up for a community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1001f8d09044,A279E174CA64,"Now, not all community services are giving away food to the homeless, it's a simple thing such as tutoring a younger student, or cleaning up the lunchroom so all the volunteers who prepared the lunch don't have another burden on their shoulders. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+38ccf080f4f5,A279E174CA64,"I think all students should do something for the community not just at home, but maybe the school can volunteer and help with the community service. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bb2335a6d43,A279E174CA64,Every student should do at least 2 community services. Maybe one at home and one at school ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+837fbd10b0b4,A279E174CA64,Just because some kids are complaining that they have to much homework or to many practices ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9cba98fb3b62,A279E174CA64,"doesn't mean that they can't throw in a little extra time for the community. Go to study hall or try to get some of your work done in school, instead of talking. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6add113cc84e,A279E174CA64,"If you are struggling with school work, then try to focus on that and then go towards the community services once your ready and caught up with school work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3592b80d9b23,A279E174CA64,"Now my opinion is that all students should participate in some sort of community services and still be able to balance out there grades and conflicting schedules. Everyone needs to be flexible, and try to help out the community for a change. It should be required, and every student should be able to handle a little community services. Thank you for taking the time to read this. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6aa5dbca0417,A27F852ECCC3,Students should be able to use their cell phones in school during any free time they have as long as they are not using them in class, during which time the phones should be turned off. ,Position,Adequate,,
+3eb22fe1989e,A27F852ECCC3,"Some students need their cell phones, because some students have certain health problems ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0e7b5a056a4,A27F852ECCC3,"that sometimes could prevent them from making it to the nearest phone nearest way to contact someone for help.
+
+If this were to happen and the student had his/her cell phone on them than they would be able to text or call 911 ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+296a8a2ed9c8,A27F852ECCC3,"even home like say if they need anything brought to the office or brought to class for them. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e65a65449e5,A27F852ECCC3,This would also in turn free up phone lines in the schools main office ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bab21c0e56a1,A27F852ECCC3,"so that the office workers job would be much quicker because no lines would be used up by any students needing to call home or wherever they must call, they could just use their cell phones. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+930b9c993528,A27F852ECCC3,"So take this matter into consideration, and maybe even call a school wide vote on it, and you don't even have to let students use them during free time such as between classes, or at lunch, or break.
+
+You can have a scheduled 15 minutes or so during the day and call it a cell phone break. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9dcc538e2f47,A27F852ECCC3,"So please, please allow students at least that much time to use their cell phones.
+
+Please go with policy 2.
+
+Besides, maybe if you allow students at least a little time to use their cell phones maybe, just maybe, they won't break the rules by using them in class anyway, so all I'm asking is just please take this letter into consideration. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9f303c8ea977,A28E9B475935,"My mother always said, ""You will never learn if you stay at home, go to school to learn more things."" Math, English, history, and science are some classes that students need to learn. If students take classes from home, then student will not learn so they will not benefit from it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c87151b7fad9,A28E9B475935,Students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+671690fcd02e,A28E9B475935,because student will gain less exercise ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+865b72efa928,A28E9B475935,students will get less social communication ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dad7eb06899f,A28E9B475935,and student will be less focus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ae7f464c26f,A28E9B475935,"Many claim, students will benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because they will feel more comparable ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd16e9158426,A28E9B475935,"However,students will not learn anything even if they feel more comparable at home. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1cc2194aaa85,A28E9B475935,"To begin, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will gain less exercise ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b75fbdd86a8,A28E9B475935,"For example, Generic_Name, who attend classes at home before, said that he will get less exercise, now that he goes to school he gets more exercise than before. To further detail, two friends, Generic_Name and Generic_Name, both attend classes at home before, they would both say that they would gain very little exercise before going to school. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will gain less exercise. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2f310a4a90a,A28E9B475935,"Additionally,students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will get less social communication. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3a1d5739aed,A28E9B475935,"For example,
+
+Generic_Name, a girl who use to attend classes at home, would not communicate much with other students at first, after some time she is able to communicate with other students. To further detail, Generic_Name, would talk very little to other students because he use to take classes at home, after a while he would talk to other students. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will get less social communication. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a40918bf36a,A28E9B475935,"Lastly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because student will be less focus. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc5d9c1e56db,A28E9B475935,"For example, Generic_Name ,a student who attend classes at home, had to difficult time focusing on the lesson at home, some later she began to understand the lessons. To further detail, Generic_Name had a terrible time focusing on the lessons when he toke classes home, he said that his surrounding was very distracting. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes from at because student will be less focus. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba5e00482c56,A28E9B475935,"To concluded, student will gain less exercise, have less communication experience, and will be less focus on lessons are reasons why students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home. These three argument state why students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes from home ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8ede2f65fde8,A2A80E683990,"The article ""Driverless cars are coming"" is a very encouraging on the behalf of driverless cars. these cars would be very helpful to those who text and drive. Sergey Brin, cofounder to Google believes that soon noone should even need cars. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+13d513b6c321,A2A80E683990,"In 2009,Google had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions. their cars have drieven more than half a million miles without crashing, but these cars aren't exactly completely driverless. For example, if you were to buy a driverless car you'd stil have to stay alert, like any other non-driverless car, but you'd be able to take your eyes off the road for about 30 seconds. If you'll have to pay attention to the car as its driving, you'd have better luck just driving it yourself. if theres an accident, traffic issues,or roadwork, you'll end up being the one who has to drive for who knows how long ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01479e9d77d9,A2A80E683990,i think that i'd have better luck just driving on my own. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80359b71530c,A2A80E683990,"People have been fascinated with driverless cars since the late 1950's. For example, in the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a soecial track. this track had been embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Engineer at Berkeley tried the same thing but this time they used magnetics with alternating polarity. The car would read positive and negative polarity messages in Binary code. The ""smart-road"" systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to the existing roads, but they were way to expensive.
+
+In the 1980's automakers would use speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock breaks. Within 10 years, these sensors had become more advanced to detect and resopnd to danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. the information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. this alowed better response and control than any human could manage alone.
+
+Sebastian Thrun, founder of the google car project, believes that the technology has finally began to catch up to the dreams. Before the 2000's, they didn't have all the sensors, the computers, or the mapping. the Radar was a device that cost two hundred thousand milion dollars. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3d149e41d940,A2A80E683990,"In 2013, BMW announced the development of ""Traffic Jam Assistant."" This car could handle driving speeds up to 25 mph. This car had special touch sensors to make sure thatthe driver keeps their hands on the wheel. The cars could steer,accelerate, and brake themselves, but if there were any traffic incidents, the car would require human skills. This means that the driver would have to stay alert as if they were driving. To keep the driver alert, GM has developed seats that vibrate the driver's seat when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The google the car announces when the driver should be prepared to take over the wheel. Also, other options for the cars driver to stay alert is flashing on the windshield and on the heads up displays. Manufacturing is also considering cameras to watch the driver or make sure that they are remaining focused on the road ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+129c1f862bb8,A2A80E683990,I don't believe that a want a car watching me when i know its somebody else video taping me and my family. Think of how akward that would feel having a computer watch your every move in your car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d5cd1083104,A2A80E683990,They think that the driver would get tired of waiting on their turn to drive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91ebc5f6a0de,A2A80E683990,"If you are a 15, 16, or 17 year old teenager who is figuring out how to drive,you'll get tired of waiting to drive, you'll be ready to put your hands on the wheel and show everyone that you've grown up. Dr. Werner, a BMW project manager driver says that ""we have to interpret the driving fun in a new way."" Some Manufactures hope to do that by bringin in car entertainment. THe purpose of the driverless car is to help texting and driving, this helps by keeping more teens out of accidents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8da4d11cfeab,A2A80E683990,"i think that driverless cars would be a waste of time because you'll still have to be alert, they'll puit camera's in your car and people shouldn't be texting and driving anyway, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3308dc36a0ed,A2EA2EC609DB,"Some people say the face on mars was an alien artifac, but others think its just a natural landform. With supporting details from the article, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0be27459ae7a,A2EA2EC609DB,I will assure you that it was just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+29065523600b,A2EA2EC609DB,"In paragraph seven, it states that the first picture to come out on a website (JPL) was a natural landform picture. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9029f272b7b,A2EA2EC609DB,"It also says that there was no alien monument after all. If you actually read the article it says that the face is made of shadows. If you put it at a different angle then I bet there wouldn't be a face, there would just be bumps on the planet mars like any other planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78972f71d69c,A2EA2EC609DB,"In paragraph twelve, the writer tells us that the picture shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbc297bfd51b,A2EA2EC609DB,Those landforms are common around the American West. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9685bac730d3,A2EA2EC609DB,"Lastly, aliens aren't real so how could something unreal make a face on mars? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3dadecc23be9,A2EA2EC609DB,"I know some people might want to belive that it was aliens, but it wasn't. Sometimes the earth/nature makes its own natural landforms, and we have to love it for what it created, not give all the credit to some unreal creature. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0a10963d3667,A2FA635C9590,"Electing a new president of the United States of America has been, and always will be, a big deal. One could be a state senator, a member of the legislative branch, or even an average citizen with zero involvement in governmental jobs/issues. The one thing that ties all of these people together - is that they're all citizens. As citizens, these people will care about who is running their country, what plans they have for it, and how those plans are carried out. Therefore, on behalf of the U.S., it is important to elect the correct person to rule a nation and keep it safe. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+844542160c78,A2FA635C9590,"The Electoral College is a flawed system used to elect presidents, and the American voting system should be based on popular vote ",Position,Effective,,,
+66493ea9ad6b,A2FA635C9590,"the votes of the Electoral College outweigh the votes of an everyday citizen, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c4563f7845e,A2FA635C9590,"the Electoral College basically has the final say in who becomes the president of the United States of America. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cc0c4dbcffc,A2FA635C9590,"One of the things that is wired throughout all three sources, is that electoral votes basicallly overpower the votes of the average citizen. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+11f6b284b579,A2FA635C9590,"When the average citizen does vote, however, their vote does not go toward the president. Their vote goes to the Electoral College, who then vote for the president. ""[...] it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote"" (Posner 16). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9f9936a44c11,A2FA635C9590,the winner of an election can win without owning the popular votes of an entire nation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7995205541d7,A2FA635C9590,"Basically, all that a candidate even needs is the majority votes of the Electoral College in order to win an election. ""[...] according to a Gallup pole in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore - thanks to the quirks of the electoral college - won the popular vote but lost the presidency[...]"" (Plumer 9). Collecting the votes of the Electoral College is the only concern of a candidate - therefore the only reason that candidates speak to the people is to influence them to cast votes for the Electoral College, which then cast votes for that candidate. ""[...] Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes [...]"" (Posner 18). It's as if the people are just physical steps that electoral voters use to get to the person that the Electoral college wants to be the president of the U.S.
+
+""Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always"" (Plumer 10). As mentioned in the article by Richard A. Posner, members of the Electoral College are chosen and expected to vote for their party's nominee. However, people don't always deliver what we expect from them. It is completly possible for an elector to change their mind, and cast their finalizing vote toward the opposite candidate. These members cast their votes directly to the candidate, and they can easily change their vote.                       ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a8f1300ab32,A30020B4E5DB,"Electoral Colleges are very important and should be in every ""state"" ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f5233d50dbcf,A30020B4E5DB,Electoral colleges are where electors go to meet up and vote for president and vice president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b4bd88984cf,A30020B4E5DB,This is a great help because they are more educated in politics than the average citizen is. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30e80ff3b7ea,A30020B4E5DB,With the knowledge in politics they can be trusted to make a good decisionon who to vote for. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7811395a1a41,A30020B4E5DB,"The Electoral College has five hundred thirty eight electors. Each state has an elector for each of the members in the House of Representatives. Not only does each candiddate running for president have their own group of electors, but you will get two of your own. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6179ceb0fcbf,A30020B4E5DB,The electors are very hard working ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d05d41009616,A30020B4E5DB,They have to count all the votes made by congress. If the Electoral Colleges aren't in Florida then who else would want to count all of the electoral votes congress. No one has the time to do that unless it's in their job description. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+af880d13ace5,A30020B4E5DB,Although an Electoral College can cost a lot of money to build they are still worth it. The bulding of the college will also be beneficial because it causes more jobas for the unemployed. Electoral Colleges are fundamental and will help improve the state's current voting system. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+fa1b54c5f848,A34F66AA1F99,The Electoral College is a very useful and easy was of voting. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+99290550e27a,A34F66AA1F99,"According to the article
+
+""What Is the Electoral College""
+
+by the Office of the Federal Register, ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of th electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6683e2f1f758,A34F66AA1F99,Basically we vote for our electors which then they vote for the President which seem to be working just fine why change it? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f12867b54537,A34F66AA1F99,"There are many resons why people are in favor of changing the Electoral College for popular vote. In the article
+
+""Why  even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong""
+
+by Bradford Plumer he asks ""Can voters  control whom their electors vote for?"" Then answers himself with ""Not always."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2213ef8df5e8,A34F66AA1F99,This may be true but voters do get to vote for thier electors and it is the voters job to vote for the one they believe will choose the right president. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+88779110a86f,A34F66AA1F99,"The people need to put faith in thier electors, and even if the Electoral College was changed to popular vote they would have to vote for the president and put faith in him or her to make the right decisions for them, is they same basic thing but having electors are just another step. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47e74d542e3e,A34F66AA1F99,"""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4aa6f16bd70e,A34F66AA1F99,"This was stated in the article ""
+
+Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President""
+
+by Richard A. Posner. This is a very good point he made, the larger states get more attention than the smaller states when it comes to  popular voting in presidental elections because they have a much larger population giving them more votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6b71b611cdb3,A34F66AA1F99,When it comes to popular voting there have been times where no canidate has a mojority cast of votes and the Electoral College Prevents that problem. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9b521051fd1,A34F66AA1F99,"In  1968 Nixon received 43 percent pluraltiy or more votes than the other canidates but still not receving a clear majority of votes in the popular votes same with Clinton in 1992 but they both won majority in the Electroral College, so there was no need for and run-off election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1095dafbc62b,A34F66AA1F99,I believe that we shouldn't change the Electoral College for popular votes the way we arevoting now is working just fine and it makes it so larger states like Texas don't get more of an impact on the election because of thier population than smaller states like Rhode Island. Also the Electoral College prevents Run-off elections. Even though some believe the Electoral College as an anachronism I think that the Electoral College is still a good way of voting. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a358f6ab60c7,A37EC2666F34,The electoral college is not a good thing and it certainly messes things up ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ac728b5ee99b,A37EC2666F34,"it takes votes away from people,  It changes the votes to make a person lose presidency even by changing the senators ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62a64094b074,A37EC2666F34,it's a winner take all system these dont turn out good no matter what ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5c2bb11b7d4,A37EC2666F34,There are many many ways to win an election and this is not one good way it can easily make one side lose even if they won the popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+475767be9e3f,A37EC2666F34,"The odds of one side winnning is easily changed with electoral votes.  This inturrupts the odds of how much the people likes them then it turns into how much the government of states likes them.  However it could help some people win if they are not the popular vote.
+
+It can also make anyone with the popular vote lose when they should have won like after Al Gore during the gallup poll thanks to the perks of the electoral college won the popular vote but he lost presidency over it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f96e1c5f4a0b,A37EC2666F34,Even though 60% of people prefer the direct election now some prefer the electoral college. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a5fa6652c557,A37EC2666F34,But this can all be due to the fact that the electoral system was made by our founding fathers on the Constitution so it may only be natural that they support it ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+f267d8360fc2,A37EC2666F34,"A good arguement was when the system allowed for far worse when the electors for defy the will of people like in passage 2 it says ""in 1960 when segragationists in the louisiana legislature almost succeeded in replacing electors who would appose John F. Kenedy"" that is just evil.  Although the law has not been changed since the Constitution was made. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0a5d31a3504,A37EC2666F34,Even at the most basic level the electoral college is still unfair to voters because of the winner take all system put in place for each state ,Claim,Effective,,,
+60a5bd7ba17e,A37EC2666F34,"They saddly dont visit every state in passage 2 it says ""Candidates dont spend time in states they know they have 0 chance of winning, focusing only on tight races"" Although the winner take all is made just to do what they are using it for by awarding electors to the presidential candidate (exept for Maine and Nebraska) it is being used for what they are using it for ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cffc7227cc8c,A37EC2666F34,"In all the electoral system is not good but its not all bad it takes the votes away from the people,Its a winner take all system, and its taking people down who deserve to win even changing the senators to make them win.  Its evil and makes no sense to what they are doing trying to give other parties a chance i get it but its gone a little to far ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2ca330428312,A38187259EEE,"For my own opinion , I think most students that have problems at school should take online or video classes at home to make it easier for them to learn and study. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9c87415d0bf1,A38187259EEE,"Most students that are special , speaks different language or problems could and should take online classes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c147f80e579,A38187259EEE,"Even if you don't have problems you could take online classes if you wanted too. You dont have to go to school and learn , you stay home and learn in the computer. Homeschooling and online classes could be different but the sames at the same time. Learning at home could be better for you. Because at school cause you dont have no one to bother you , or giving you bad ideas , or cause trouble at schools on you learning experiences. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fbddd9da0b1a,A38187259EEE,"Some students would have benefits from being able attend classes from home? Some benefits could be like. "" What if its a bad idea to do it ? "" , "" What if I don't do good at it ? "" or "" What if I can't do it at home or at school ? "". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+640371b322ff,A38187259EEE,Some have different ideas that it could be better for them to learn. At school it mighty be different cause there a lot of teacher and students that be different than you. At online school your at home with your parents and siblings? ad have only one teacher that teaches you on the computer ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cf8be69b1093,A38187259EEE,Its your dession to choose school to learn or online whatever that you comfortable for you to learn. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+574f47443635,A38187259EEE,"For me if I could choose , I'll choose going to school. Why? because its more better for me to learn from a teacher in person and see what they are do for me to learn. Online its okay , but staying at home make me get lazy and too comfortable by staying home ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9dbc7b0c4402,A38187259EEE,"So for me to learn , is by going to public or private school are better for me to learn , educate , and socialize to others , its better for me. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bc588a6b44e,A38187259EEE,"So online classes are not for everyone. Like me I perfer going to school , not taking classes online. But what I say
+
+"" whatever that make you comfortable for you to learn "". For me is going to school learn amd talk to other students. Wahtever you chosses for you to do then do it. Online classes are greate! but for dome people don't think so, So my option are both some students benifets to do online or some doing it school.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+84545f7e82f1,A3960A410B74,"My friends father always complains about how the voting systems work here in the U.S. He believes that the electoral votes should not really matter. He strongly leans on the idea that candidates should win an election by the popular votes. Although the Electoral College has helped with many situations before, like the 2000 election, when Al Gore had the more popular votes then Bush yet, fewer electoral votes. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+15881b6a9a71,A3960A410B74,"I'm started to believe that changing the electoral votes to popular votes would be better for elections of presidents. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+f1584a938daa,A3960A410B74,"Replacing the electoral college with popular votes would be better for elections of presidents because, it's the peoples choice. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b816546e368,A3960A410B74,"For examlpe, people vote for the candidates that they more relate too and their choices. Having the electoral college around can make an impact to their choice. Say if a majority of a state vote for a candidate, but the state doesn't have enough electoral votes for that canididate to take a lead or win the election. How can they get there favorite candidate to win the election? The electoral college is blocking that way for that particular state. In brief, people need their say for their favorite candidate instead of the electoral college giving them points. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f3651ce8b69d,A3960A410B74,"However, the electoral college has some pros for the candidate and also the states. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+47d360bf4521,A3960A410B74,"For instance, the states of california has many electoral points for candidate to win an election. I believe there are fifty-three for that states because they have many representatives. If the majority of the people in the state vote for a democrat or a republicin the electoral points goes to either one of them. Giving that candidate big points to even take a lead in the election ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fc44580677fe,A3960A410B74,"To wrap it up, the electoral college do have pros and cons in a election. The electoral college can give a candidate the election. But the popularity vote are for the people and by the people. I stiil stay towards to the idea that the popularity vote is a greater way for voting. Remember it does say We The People in the Declaration of Independence which was sighn by our founding fathes.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1a4c34380d12,A39A5B1F2538,I think you should keep the electoral colleges. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f135097d99ce,A39A5B1F2538,The elctoral colleges are not a vote for presidency but its the vote for slate of electors who in turn elect the president. This is a great way to find a good president because if the people voted they might not know much about the president that they are voting for ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c288ac9f263,A39A5B1F2538,if the slate of electers are the ones who pick the president they might know what the man running for president is not telling us. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8cabd27dd8fe,A39A5B1F2538,"If their is a tie in the electoral votes than the election would be thrown to the house of representatives, where state deligates vote on the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+45c8b8ab9434,A39A5B1F2538,The electoral colleges has been an american tradition for hundred of years ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a79bc1ab24e,A39A5B1F2538,why would you end such a long and strong condition. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+817a9e6a7c0b,A39A5B1F2538,The only bad thing about the electoral colleges in my opinion is that it is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in each state. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d8b71e547fbc,A39A5B1F2538,"during the 200 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including road island and south carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad."" Bobe dole thinks they should abolish the electoral college he thinks its unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d088d9533e5,A39A5B1F2538,It is the electers who vote for presiden not the people it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the nations popular vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e0a630cc7232,A39A5B1F2538,It happened in 200 when gore had more popular votes than bush but bush had more electoral votes and bush still won the race and became president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19c14ecae21e,A39A5B1F2538,You should keep the electoral college throughout history it has helped us in many ways. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2af41d297092,A39A5B1F2538,Lots of people say you should abolish it but give it a few more years and see what happens. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05f424b44890,A39A5B1F2538,The electoral college also stops run off electios this means no candidate recieves a majority of the vote cast ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a172693c7dbc,A39A5B1F2538,If their is a run off election the people might think the election was rigged or unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84d30dce5dbe,A39A5B1F2538,"So please leave the electoral college alone it benefits us in a lot of ways. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef4ba15cbcc1,A3B1F9DB5721,"On May 24,2001 NASA vikings 1 spacecraft was circling mars and snapped a photo of a strange human like face on mars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+04d9f3c79f9a,A3B1F9DB5721,It just so happens its not actually a face. Scientists discovered that the face on mars was just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+78c9a716343c,A3B1F9DB5721,"Some people think aliens created the ""face"" on mars. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4e4568e0a382,A3B1F9DB5721,"However, aliens did not create the face on mars. The face was a natural landform, scientists did tons of research on this face. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+307e0a1faa6a,A3B1F9DB5721,At first the scientists thought the face on mars was just another Martian mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+400fc6d78c59,A3B1F9DB5721,"Once this face was captured on camera a few days later NASA revealed the face they took a picture of on mars. The face then was starred in a hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines and even radio talk shows.
+
+When the scientists were researching the face on mars, like i said they thought it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96737d099019,A3B1F9DB5721,"Many people make ridiculous assuotions, like how they think aliens created this face on mars, even though there can be human life on mars but those are just theorys people are making. Which is when everyone starts amking these assuptions and even make it look belivable that aliens could have possible made the ""face on mars"". ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+0a09fc0e05e5,A3B1F9DB5721,"
+So aliens did not create this human like face on mars it was mostly just consquently mistaken to be one becuase it really is just huge rocks together just so happening to look like a face.                                      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+56e323975a4b,A3B7147D30B1,i would rather change to voting for most popular president in the united states and the electoral college is simply to complicated ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7bf50b88e1ee,A3B7147D30B1,the electoral college consist of 538 electors a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president your states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member in the house of representatives plus two of your senators ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+419f1da448d8,A3B7147D30B1,all of that thats just really confusing for the new guy and me ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11547bfb36fc,A3B7147D30B1,why cant we simply have two groups the group with the most votes chose the president to elect simple right yah i thought so too ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7dfaed64abdb,A3B7147D30B1,other ways such as under the 23rd admendment of the constitution the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college for this reason in the following discussion the word state also refers to the district of columbia each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors the electors are generally chosen by the candidates political party but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what responsibilities ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da6d6c1a4251,A3B7147D30B1,all of that is my goodnes its all to complicated for most people to understand ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b9a705eef67,A3B7147D30B1,the presidential election is held every four years on the tuesday after the first monday in november you help choose your states electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates electors most states have winner take all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate however maine and nebraska each have a variation of proportional representation see thats what i mean real complicated stuff. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a454a9ae9fc,A3D23CFB2043,Their are alot of dicusions on wether we should get rid of an electoral college. But i think we should keep them for five reason ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bb9fcb2d63bf,A3D23CFB2043,Cernainty of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c98a5413be6,A3D23CFB2043,",Everyones president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+56d2f0a2dcd8,A3D23CFB2043,swing states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20aa9f3e2ed5,A3D23CFB2043,big states ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9696e1078e06,A3D23CFB2043,to avoid run-off elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e21967e71e69,A3D23CFB2043,"People think that it wouldnt reliable if we changed the way we elect a new president. Not everyone will agree to this,and the majority will stick to electoral college because if been working for us since the 1800. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c9571a7f1b5,A3D23CFB2043,Cernaint of outcome basically decides everything because it doesnt allow to be a tie. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70f9d0ec9a3d,A3D23CFB2043,Like in 2012 when obama and romney were running obama won because he new that people want a winner take all basis. Obama got 61% of electorla votes and Romney got 51%.Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winners take all basis the state creates a landslide electoral vot victory in that state. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d09d1dc3dfeb,A3D23CFB2043,The electoral college reguires a presidential candidate to have regional appeal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4bdc3de5126,A3D23CFB2043,Not one region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. Romney was from the south so people in their voted for him. But people up north thought that would be greedy and our nation needs a president for all. It was a situation that he would only apply or do anything for the south but nothing for the north. So candidates with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a succesful president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78a07753d0ae,A3D23CFB2043,The winner takes all method focuses their campaign efforts on the toss up states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c46e82f7ccd,A3D23CFB2043,People in the toss up state are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign to really listen to the competing candidates knowing that they are going to decide who gets elected. They are the more thoughtful voter and they will give more attention than normal. So people who care about who gets elected should get their votes in. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5248d69b561,A3D23CFB2043,"Last,the electoral college avoids the problems of elections in which no candidates recieves a majority of the votes cast ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+042be6a3e820,A3D23CFB2043,"The presidential election process is reduced by the electoral college which proves a clear win. Knowing people who dont care shows the candidates that their votes wont count,and voters in elections are the people who want to express and show political preference rather people think that one vote wont change the fate of the election ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+551a6400eaf0,A3D23CFB2043,So as you can see the Electoral college method is very reliable and will keep our nation safe.            ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0be764ff822b,A3D4D71B62F4,"Recently it has come to my attention that there is some controversy over the potential community service requirement. Some students believe that community service is important and are very passionate about the work they are doing. However, other students think that community service will take away too much time from other things they participate in, which are of greater value to them. As you can see, both sides have valid points to make. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+84d2ac3d8ecc,A3D4D71B62F4,"To solve the problem in a way that is pleasing to both sides, I propose to you a compromise. If a student keeps a grade average of an A, community service will be optional. If a student's grades fall below that, community service will be a requirement. ",Position,Effective,,,
+7e2e4da366ef,A3D4D71B62F4,"First, this solution addresses the wants of the first group. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8249df7f5e82,A3D4D71B62F4,"They value community service greatly and think that everyone should pitch in. In the compromise, students with grades below an A average will be required to help. This is a fair number of people to help their cause. The A students have the option of community service, and I feel confident saying that many of the kids who already partake in community service have good grades. In this way, the first group has a large amount of students assisting the community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b7cd677d6fda,A3D4D71B62F4,The compromise I have volunteered also meets the needs of the other group ,Claim,Effective,,,
+803ab910914b,A3D4D71B62F4,". If the kids that think community service will interfere with their schedule have A averages, then they will not need to do the community service. However, if their grades fall below that mark, they will need to participate. This ensures that the kids who do not do the community service are spending enough of their time on schoolwork. As the principal, motivating kids to achieve higher in school should appeal to you. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bcb318e3d8a7,A3D4D71B62F4,". I believe that using my compromise will better the grades of our student body, encourage community service, and please both those who are for and those who are against the community service requirement. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7383d3ad8d42,A3EA9A580A6A,8th students should be able to use cell phones during our free time as long as the teacher allows it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e0123b92cc69,A3EA9A580A6A,"Either way the phones will be turned off during class anyway, because some kids be going to the nurse and the nurse don't always call there parents so they don't always get pick up if they are sick ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ea1d55000b8,A3EA9A580A6A,"So like during lunch they would maybe be able to text or call there parent to come pick them up. So either way students are going to end up using there cell phones anyway don't matter what the problem is. Some students might leave there gym clothes or homework they had that night. They wouldn't most likely pass that day. Most likely, because they weren't able to ask for of there parents to bring there stuff to them, because they didn't know they left it. It makes since what i' m saying because, nobody knows what is wrong with the person except the person its self. Like they might have a problem and they need picked up and the person don't want nobody to know about it ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c40a86ab7002,A3EA9A580A6A,"Some people I know most likely use cell phones anyway to get checked out or just to check, because they be ""bored"" and don't want to learn. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0a83ec91723,A3EA9A580A6A,"So as I was saying you should allow 8th grade to use cell phones because this is our last year at this school it's suppose to be fun. Since this is the "" Best Middle School In The World"". Without the 6th and 7th grade being allowed to do it with us ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da941f60c424,A3EA9A580A6A,So please think about this opportunity and please let this be aloud. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c62c983dca2a,A3EF457B5F61,Ill like to talk to you about us students being required to perform community service. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+93c9f4facb8e,A3EF457B5F61,"My position on this subject is the students should have the choice to do community service or not, they shouldn't be required to do. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+dfbc9cf40fae,A3EF457B5F61,It should be our choice to do community service or not because first of all we as children or preteens shouldn't be required or forced to do those kind of things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a950ffc8cfc6,A3EF457B5F61,"we our children not adults, and there is nothing in this country stating we have to do community service. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+206f34d7b8ef,A3EF457B5F61,"Also sometimes from school, sports, and other activities we do we are very busy as is ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f30a11645cfe,A3EF457B5F61,adding community service on to that we just make us more stressed as we sometimes are with all those things going on ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1de447945e27,A3EF457B5F61,Another reason why we shouldn't is that we want to hang out with friends and do a lot of fun things with them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c15fda604536,A3EF457B5F61,"such as going to the mall, seeing a movie, and playing outside on a nice day, but if we have community service we cant do all those things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+695b3070b22f,A3EF457B5F61,"with a lot of people saying children have to start getting outside and getting more active, what are we going to do if we have community service to do ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dda9ba26c839,A3EF457B5F61,"we wont be able to get more active, are we ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54c2aa20ece3,A3EF457B5F61,"sometimes we receive a lot of homework at school or have a big project to do, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4cc8ca7185e7,A3EF457B5F61,"hen if we have to do community service we might not be able to finish it before school the next day, which can get us behind on what we were doing in that class and ruining our grades. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f32108f2fc13,A3EF457B5F61,This is why i think students shouldn't have to be required to do community service coming from a student stand point. Thank you for reading and i hope you consider my concern ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9fcd20743fc3,A40F9F8D7CFC,Why should the people of the united states vote if the electoral votes are the onlt ones that count? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7071b7d223c3,A40F9F8D7CFC,I feel it should be up to the people of the united states not all up to the electors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9c744b22b12e,A40F9F8D7CFC,i feel we as the people of the united states that are votes should count ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+54e79a7571cb,A40F9F8D7CFC,we shouldnt have to depend on someone else. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+422547c5aebf,A40F9F8D7CFC,"Even though if the electors tie and then the peoples votes count it would be fair but we be able to fight for are country  at the age eighteen and be able to  vote but still not count is unfair because that would then be the boss of are country and are troops. Also they can leave us to fight over seas and defend are country but we have electors who stay in th u. s all there life and get to chose who run the untied states. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cadb4e49d607,A40F9F8D7CFC,It should not be are votes through another person we dont know. For an example that would be like giving a stranger three-thousand dollors and telling it to mail it to one of your family members its a fifty-fifty chance its going to actully get to them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c8ccbd0329c8,A40F9F8D7CFC,I just feel that are votes should matter more then electoral votes we get harmed by what ever the president does not any of the electorals. Most of the people now days dont even get into the elections for that reason that they dont  even matter. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6f9ac761efd6,A40F9F8D7CFC,Plus that was the old way of doing the presidency but now were in 2014 it should change cause it only will effect the people of the united states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30390e4e1ad0,A4104F998C73,It has come to the attention of the student body that you are considering two possible plans of action to deal with the evident cell phone problem. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+e4afc224d452,A4104F998C73,I will go ahead and start by telling you that taking away cell phones all together will only cause misery and sorrow for all. It is my suggestion and that of the school that you would allow us to have our phones available for use in our free time and lunch periods. ,Position,Effective,,,
+adb7acb0f3c4,A4104F998C73,Of course they would be turned off in class as they should. There are so many reasons that we use phones as much as we do and taking them away will cause a tension like no other. The good outweighs the bad in this situation for many reasons and I am prepared to prove that. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d5a7461dc133,A4104F998C73,The bottom line and one of the main reasons we should have our phones available for use is the connection. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5aac6ded2498,A4104F998C73,"Kids need to be connected and be able to interact with each other. It is simply part of being a growing person. We need that constant interaction to settle our nerves and keep us up on our friends lives. Obviously the class room is not the appropriate place or time for that. However, kids texting and talking in their own free time is completely acceptable. Connection is important to kids. Take it away and all is lost for us all. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1f3fccfa02b3,A4104F998C73,There is a big question that goes through a teens mind every time they are told to put there phone away. That question is what is 'What's the point of having a phone if I can't use it?' While it may seem immature and childish it is a legitimate question ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9021017c0965,A4104F998C73,Is there really a point of having a phone if you are constantly told to put it up and keep it off. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a1316a04049,A4104F998C73,Do you think that a kid or teen texting in the hall is going to bring the world to a stop. Ask yourself for you may have a cell phone to 'what's the point?' ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccce84e8395b,A4104F998C73,As the day goes by and the homework piles up stress is immense to say the least. One of the great things about cell phones is that they are great at relieving stress ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f6dafe07c33d,A4104F998C73,At some points of the day it seems like your world is going to explode. A funny text from a friend is a sure fire way to cheer up your day. Stress cushions and massages can claim to calm you down but the best way to cool your nerves and get a grip is by sitting down and talking to a friend over the phone. Take some of the ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4d9557fe4b0,A4104F998C73,"It may be one of the worst mistakes made by adults, thinking that taking away cell phones will solve all of their problems. It will only make kids made ,who will in turn make adults and teachers alike, miserable. If you haven't found out already, cell phones are actually for the benefit of all, even in a school environment. It will make life for teachers a breeze and likewise for kids. For all of these reasons and so many more I would ask you with the sincerity of my heart that you will please consider letting us use our cell phones in school. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c576189b503f,A42A600EEB0D,"Technology make the lives easier of millions of people.
+
+It makes communication easier and more convenient.
+
+People all over the world want to integrate technology into as many aspects of their lives as possible.
+
+Schools are jump on this bandwagon by integrating online distance learning and video conferencing into their curriculum.
+
+Some educators find this would enhance the education of students, because they can learn during most any circumstances, but some believe this would be much more challenging and inconvenient because of internet issues and the situation of students when are are absent from school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5651c6c1726d,A42A600EEB0D,Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home through video conferencing and other forms of distance learning. ,Position,Effective,,,
+73a4bea0fa39,A42A600EEB0D,"
+When students are absent, they are absent for a reason, whether good or bad.
+
+They are not able or willing to attend school, and they are not going to attend online classes from home. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5d4afcd1a0de,A42A600EEB0D,"A student who is too sick to attend school, needs to rest, and concentrate on getting better so they can attend school, not worry about the assignments they have to do or lessons they need to learn.
+
+If school is canceled for inclement weather, many students might lose power or internet service and not be able to get work done.
+
+Students who have to travel often due to highly competitive sports do not have time to work on assignments while at tournaments, games, and competitions, but coaches for clubs and travel programs have rules about the grades their athletes have to keep to be able to play and travel; this will keep athletes from getting far behind and from being unprepared on graded assignments on new subjects. It would not be beneficial for students to have virtual learning because, when students are not going to come to school they are not going to do school work. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d1a54fcf982c,A42A600EEB0D,"
+Technology often has problems and cannot be guaranteed to work and not every student does not has access to internet connection. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4432eb1cccde,A42A600EEB0D,"Technology, in some areas, does not work every day and sometimes cannot be used at all.
+
+At Generic_School, there are countless days when the the internet is completely down and no electronic devices can be used.
+
+Teachers who have planned to use technology for their lesson have to come up with something different to do, with no preparation time, which leads to misusing class time at the fault of the technology errors.
+
+If a teacher assigns work over a weekend, while the school can provide a laptop, they cannot provide wifi and internet connection in the homes of their students.
+
+Many students do not have the funds to pay for wifi and are not able to drive to a library to connect to the internet.
+
+Even if a student has technology, there is always a large chance their technology might not work.
+
+This is not the fault of the student and they should not be penalized for it.
+
+Technology caused student to be more stressed and worried bout whether or not their assignment will upload on time, or if a lesson will load and play, and it is not necessary.
+
+Technology is not practical or easily accessible for many students. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c579c0a99009,A42A600EEB0D,"Some would argue that their are students who want to continue learning when they are not at school, and they will be the ones to do the work assigned and benefit from it. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7d313abcd7dd,A42A600EEB0D,"Teachers and educators would say those are the students the assignments are made for in the first place, but it is not fair to the students who do the work if the majority does not. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a4eb6a1bffe5,A42A600EEB0D,"A student who comes inside on her snow day to work on homework, watch lessons, and turn everything in on time, but gets back to school and listen to the same lesson again because her peers did not learn the information, is wasting her time.
+
+The students who do not do the assignment are also wasting the time of the teacher who made the lessons and assignments.
+
+For the students who might attempt to do the work, there is nothing stopping them from sitting on their phone during online lectures and nothing stopping them from searching for answers online, making distance learning completely ineffective
+
+Many students do not do the homework assigned while in class when the directions are given to them in person, so they will not put in the extra effort from home. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5bd6f64e1cfe,A42A600EEB0D,"While distance learning may seem great, it is not practical or time effective.
+
+Distance learning and virtual lectures may seem like a great way to adapt the classroom to more modern standards, but is not time effective, realistic or easily accessible to all.
+
+Students will not benefit from being able to attend classes from home it would only waste the time of teachers and students who do the assignments.
+
+Technology issues are too great a problem for virtual classrooms to be practical and when a student does not come to school they are not going to attend an online lecture of do extra school work at home.
+
+Students are not able to get the same quality information and education from an online video as they get from a lesson given by a teacher in person that can be adapted for each class.
+
+Online distance learning is not beneficial to students, and should not be implemented in schools. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5c9ae54c5729,A42D860C93B0,"Dear Senator of the state of Florida,
+
+I belive there is something wrong with our voting system. Evidence has shown that our electoral system has shown some minor errors. In the election 2000 George W. Bush won because he had more electoral votes than his oppenenet Al Gore. But, Al Gore had more popular votes than Bush. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+586012615591,A42D860C93B0,"If this great country of ours is a democracy, shouldnt be the president decided by the people for the people. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+21c12a600c44,A42D860C93B0,"The electoral college has been around for 100-200 years now. When are founding fathers came to this country, they never said to have a voting system like this. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a23e3667975a,A42D860C93B0,The people voted and those were counted and that was how the president was decied. IN the 1960's John F. Kennedy was running for president. In Lousiana race and segragation was still happening. The legislature of the state tried to change the electoral vote so all the pouplar votes would count against Kennedy. so the votes of the voter will have never counted. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10dff645b175,A42D860C93B0,But the system of working is also a good thin. the votes can be avergae easier ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+212cd36e409c,A478B81F277D,state senator i am writing this letter to argue in favor of keeping the electoral college and changing to election by polulor vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00cd73783dc1,A478B81F277D,peolpe and citizens have the right to vote for who they think would be a good leader for ower counrty. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b596906054dc,A478B81F277D,I think that we should keep it like this because if we dont have enugh peolple to vote there may be a 100% that there will be a tie ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6439cb1abd9f,A478B81F277D,"Like in 1976 there was a tie if a mere 5,559 voters in ohio and 3,687 voters in hawaii had voted the other way there wouldnt have been a tie. I do know that under the electoral college system, voters vote for the president ,but for a slate of electors ,who in turn elect the president. I also know that the peolpe who pick the electors in the firs place depend on the state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+db451b2a2cce,A478B81F277D,"In conclution , i would like to make this argue because i think that we should be the ones that get the chance to vote for some one that i think we enough trust in please i hope that you understand the reason to why i am arguing in favor of keeping the electoral college and changing to election by populor vote for the president of the united states ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0358ebd2f2f2,A47BE7BB6F08,"The Electoral college is a proccess that was established in the constitution by the founding fathers as a compromise between the votes in congress and popular vote of certified citizens that leads to how they select the president.
+
+The Electoral college has electors who actually vote for the president  and these votes are counted by congress. The Electoral college holds 538 electors , but it is required the at least 270 electors must vote in order to elect a president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+560d67f8c029,A47BE7BB6F08,"where the people do have a chance to vote and their vote is seen as a popular vote , but it seems like the electors votes count more than the peoples. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6629bd918158,A47BE7BB6F08,"The electoral college has been a way of electing our president for years , but there is one question . Do the peoples votes really matter? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+25111cd20670,A47BE7BB6F08,"In the electoral college there has been cases where the people voted for a president but yet the electors chose otherwise , so are they really representing our votes or are they just getting Americans to believe that their votes actually count? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+444c9c73c3d0,A47BE7BB6F08,Under the Electoral college system voters don't really vote for the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46db2702fba0,A47BE7BB6F08,"Voters are actually voting for the slate electors who in turn elect the president.
+
+For example if you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for John Kerry you'd vote for the slate of the amount of democratic electors that are pledged to Kerry.
+
+If they won the statewide election ,then they would go to congress and kerry would get the electoral votes from the amount of slate that Texas has. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3fd18b208272,A47BE7BB6F08,The electoral college is not fair to the voters. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf64b3267391,A47BE7BB6F08,"This reason is because of their winner takes all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in the states they feel they have no chance of winning. They only focus on the
+
+""swing"" states , the states they feel they have a chance in or feel they have to win over. During the 2000 campaign , seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all and the largest media didn't get to see a single  campaign ad. Candidates only visit states they feel are important to them which is considered unfair to the voters who actually vote for them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0cb1a1da36c8,A47BE7BB6F08,"The electoral college method  may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. The fact that they feel their vote has no effect, they pay less attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+539f9869fdb4,A47BE7BB6F08,The people's votes should matter because it is our country these choies  affect. The electoral college method is discouraging some of the voters to vote. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6e5a2dcb9e2d,A47BE7BB6F08,Lets get rid of the electoral college and let the people's vote actuaully matter.                                ,Position,Effective,,,
+f657cc37eea7,A49E1A5FA91B,I am writing you a letter in regards of the electoral college. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1847562b7c1f,A49E1A5FA91B,I believe we should abolish it completely. I believe that we should change our voting system to election by popular vote for the president of the United Sates. ,Position,Effective,,,
+d70e5c9fc180,A49E1A5FA91B,"While it is a good system, it is not reliable and does not let the people truly decide who their representative will be. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1d21abfe2102,A49E1A5FA91B,It does bring some certainty of outcome but not as much as it should. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5100df8528bb,A49E1A5FA91B,The electoral college must be abolished because it does not let the people truly decide who their president will be. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+44afa222f6cf,A49E1A5FA91B,"While it does allow them to vote for a slate of electors who then elect the president usually based off of the popular vote, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4a342c0d1ada,A49E1A5FA91B,"they do not always vote for who they are supposed to. The slate of electors that the people vote for are supposed to be trusted to vote for what the popular vote says, they do not always do so. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fc34f15c22e4,A49E1A5FA91B,"A good example of that is in 2000, when Al Gore ran against George W Bush. Al Gore won the popular vote nationwide over Bush, he still didnt win the presidency because the electoral college did not stay true to their word and voted for Bush. That is because, as shown in Source 3, paragraph 15, "" When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+48b713199c27,A49E1A5FA91B,So while you might think your individual vote makes a difference ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8714250fb9f1,A49E1A5FA91B,"it doesnt at all, for you are not choosing which presidential candidate to vote for, you are voting for someone else to vote for the president who might not always stay true to their word and vote for a different candidate. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e9e065c780d5,A49E1A5FA91B,"Although the electoral college does bring better certainty of outcome than a popular vote, it does not have the certainty it claims to have. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6d23a29798d3,A49E1A5FA91B,"In Source 2, paragraph 12 it states, ""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote."" This is a big worry because the electoral college holds a total of 538 votes which is definetely possible to cause a tie. If this were to happen, then the vote would be thrown to the House of Representatives where state delegations would vote on the president. Then the concept of the presidential campaigns would become pointless because the point of campaining is to try to win over large, swing states to ensure more votes. Because the bigger the states population, the more votes they hold in the electoral college. But that would only work if it was in the Senates hands because the amount of representatives in the Senate for each state is based off of population, whereas the amount of representatives in the House of Representatives is always two for each state. So if the vote was thrown into the House of Representatives hands, then whichever candidate who holds claim over the most states, regardless of size, would almost automatically win the election because each state holds equal say in their vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a5e15199d4c5,A49E1A5FA91B,"So because the electoral college is obviously unfair, it should be abolished. Because the voters are told they decide who reopresents them, yet they do not. There is a possibility, while slim that a president could win the popular votes, yet lose the election because of the way the electoral college is set up. So because it unfair to the presidential candidates, it should be abolished and we should have elections controlled by popular votes.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5be5505997cc,A4C33694BE0C,"Did you know in 1976 a picture was taken of a ""face"" on Mars?
+
+Most people believe that it is a sign that there is life on Mars or a sign of aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a2522d9b20ee,A4C33694BE0C,"But, people who agree with NASA know it is actually just a mesa. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b9f04a848dca,A4C33694BE0C,"There is two sides to this picture of a ""face"" either you think it is a sing of life or it is a mesa. So, the figure similar to a face isn't a face because it is similar to landforms on Earth, the figure is to big to be a real face, and it is actually a mesa. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b0f59d8f84fb,A4C33694BE0C,"Matter of fact, the figure/landform on Mars similar to a ""face"" is a lot like landforms on planet Earth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97383b227cd5,A4C33694BE0C,"For example,""'It reminds me most of Middle Buttle in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,' says Garvin.""(12) This quote provides evidence that the figure/landform on Mars is similar to landforms on Earth. So, this is evidence that the figure on Mars is just a landform like what we have on Earth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32bb231a075e,A4C33694BE0C,"Next, the figure similar to a ""face"" is to big to be a real face. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ce3a6d70d83a,A4C33694BE0C,"For example,""An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end.""(1) This quote shows that the head is to big to be a real face. Like, what face is two miles long from end to end? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79a9e63b4e6c,A4C33694BE0C,"Last but not least, the figure/landform similar to a ""face"" is actually a mesa! ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9c4773cae28c,A4C33694BE0C,"For example,""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa - landforms common around the American West.""(12) This quote proves that the figure/landform is just a mesa. There is no life on Mars or aliens making signs. It is simply just a common landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c019782680a6,A4C33694BE0C,"Finally, the figure/landform similar to a face isn't a face. It isn't a face because it is a common landform on Earth. It is way to big to be a real face. Also, the figure/landform is simply just a mesa. These are all reasons and proof that the landform on Mars isn't a sign of life or aliens it is just a common landform. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aad9851d51bc,A4C9096A123B,I think the electoral college should be changed and people old enough to vote should be able to chhose who they want to be president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7551a7b008f5,A4C9096A123B, I think people should be able to choose who they want to be prsident because. And he start destroying the economy and he starts taking away things that some people need to survive or maintain. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+817aa0905dc5,A4C9096A123B,One reason I think citizens should be able to choose who they want to be prsident because what if someone gets elected as president and for example he or she decides to begin a marshal law in the whole united states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c975d8bbbfd3,A4C9096A123B,Then he starts putting a chip in evevyones body and we get told when to eat and when not to eat. Then he or she starts to put us in concentration camps and we get paid 2 cents a hour and killed if we dont cooperate. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a2d3cd5aec0,A4C9096A123B,Another reason I think citizens should be able to choose who they want to be president is because. Its not fair to people cause that would be like a citizens vote doesnt even count and the government doesnt really care about what citizens think and they dont care about how we feel. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b13be273b818,A4C9096A123B,"Then if the wrong person gets elected and he or does something no one likes everybody gone be mad cause they didnt for that to happen. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0925cfbb04f9,A4C9096A123B,Finally I think citizens should be able to vote for who they want to be president is because I honestly dont think the government doent care how anybody feel. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a05ae41526b6,A4C9096A123B,And The Electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. The electoral college method for selecting presidents may turn off potential voters for a canidate who has no carrying their state. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+507ca40551a9,A4C9096A123B,Now you see why I think people should be able to choose who they want to be president. I hope you enjoy reading my letter and i hope you see where im coming from and what im talking about.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b2e3e355c68a,A500CCF711B0,I think that every student should do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5edb2fe71620,A500CCF711B0,"This is because it helps out the school, the community, and it helps make them a better person. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3df8d53ede4f,A500CCF711B0,"It doesn't even take that long to do some sort of service. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+848e1e52df8c,A500CCF711B0,But if everyone got into the attitude that if we help someone then something good might happen to them one day. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea08264bd715,A500CCF711B0,"If no one volunteered to do anything than the school would look bad, the community to, and no one would be a better person.
+
+Hard work will pay off one day.
+
+See if we do community service it could help the school, the community, or maybe even make that person a better person. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+39c7ead03f31,A500CCF711B0,If everyone did community service than the school would look nice and the teachers would be more organized. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47b5593011cb,A500CCF711B0,The community it would look clean and far from litter. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4bc0423f8e7,A500CCF711B0,The person once they are done with helping they will feel better about themselves. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56fc43208b7b,A500CCF711B0,"But where would the world be without some sort of community service to make a difference.
+
+By starting a community service project the world would be a better place. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40a411027c40,A500CCF711B0,The thing of it is that community service doesn't even take that long. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+399b46a469d6,A500CCF711B0,"You could do it for an hour or you could do five.
+
+Just a little bit counts.
+
+When you help someone for that little bit of time you are making them happy not just yourself.
+
+So go do that little bit and make yourself feel better, other people feel better, and even make the world a better place. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb945d5ec605,A500CCF711B0,"You know when you help others something good will happen to you one day. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6b61f1aacad3,A500CCF711B0,But if you have this attitude that nothing good will ever come out of helping someone you would be wrong. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+d82133880d9e,A500CCF711B0,"It won't happen right away but give it time.
+
+If you are happy and have a good attitude about what will happen to you and someone else is happy because of you then you have done a good job. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+6451ef64fa5b,A500CCF711B0,"But without a program to do anything like this then no one will know what it is like.
+
+If no one volunteered to help out with anything that had to do with work then where would the world be.
+
+The schools would look really bad because if no one helped them how would it be anything.
+
+The community you have people who help clean it up they do it because they want to not because they have to.
+
+The people wanted to make the community look nice so that way they don't have to live in a disgusting place.
+
+But if kids don't learn now that helping is good in anyway then they will be no one because they didn't try to make a difference. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+230d0db68d09,A55300746CE7,Hoping for a mere 538 people to vote for our nations president seems like an unfair way of voting ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fbf7c922e9da,A55300746CE7,"The Electoral College is a process of voting in which 538 electors vote for the new president for our nation, where 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Which ever elective has the most votes from states is the winner. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff4b1d9218f8,A55300746CE7,"I believe that if the Electoral College was abolished, then we can have a more fair way of voting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f1414979174,A55300746CE7,"Sure, The electoral college has some perks like a certainty of outcome ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1051eb988018,A55300746CE7,but there is more negatives on keeping it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8de3b6cefc69,A55300746CE7,"If we got rid of the Electoral College for good and replaced it for a classic ""most-votes wins"" election then the nation can have a clear view to who their votes go to. This way, votes aren't decided by popular electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d1196710355,A55300746CE7,The president should win over the most of our country with good qualitys that people want to see. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8949c4061a89,A55300746CE7,"People need to open their eyes and see ""When you vote for a candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" (Posner, In Defense of the Electoral College) If you vote for your favorite candidate you are voting for the state to win by popular vote. We should keep it simple. Add up everyones vote for whom they voted, and who ever has more votes wins. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7ea35ea3cc6,A55300746CE7,"""The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.""(Plumer, The Indefensible Electoral College) It says it all, when the Founding Fathers made the Electoral college, the country was a lot smaller than it is today. The Electoral College was needed because there was a chance that the election could be tied. Today, the country is huge. The chance of a tie 1 in a trillion chance. I feel that we should give it a try, and abolish the College. This nation stands by freedom, and voting should be a choice.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+dc2a17ed3c76,A57F5B6E1247,There is one particular issue that has been boggling my brain recently. It is none other than the electoral college system. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+818bb634a116,A57F5B6E1247,"Irrational, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b282008110ef,A57F5B6E1247,"unfair , ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+592019e7c126,A57F5B6E1247,outdated is exactly what the electoral college system is. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38c3e9567536,A57F5B6E1247,"Isn't the virtues of American's built on foundations such as rationality, equality/fairness, and mobility? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0e662ad219f,A57F5B6E1247,"The head of the United States government isn't even elected to the standards that we, the American people, hold ourselves to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+56e1a2533068,A57F5B6E1247,"With our current system, hundreds of thousands of Americans votes don't matter. This mass of people is citizens of eligibility to vote. Where are there rights? What does this say about our system? The ""winner takes all theory"" ignores voters. If a state leans 51% democrat, then the entire state is accounted for the democratic party. What about those 49% of republicans. Where does their vote go? - down the toliet along with the credibility and accuracy of the electoral college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fdd85414d1ee,A57F5B6E1247,"Now, if this predicament occurs in near half of our 50 states, a candidate who did not recieve the popular vote will reign triumphant over a candidate who a majority of the American people elected to be their new president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c60ffc7732d0,A57F5B6E1247,"According to, ""The Indefensible College"", by Bradford Plummer, Americans lose out on more than just an acountable vote. Candidates don't even spend time in the states they are certain of having no chance in winning. Logically, candidates only spend their time in the ""swing states"" where they could possibly steal al of that states eleectoral college votes (lines 13-20). Shockingly 17 states didn't see a single candidate during the 2000 election (lines 20-21). We sure did suceed and ignoring hundreds of thousands Americans there. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+66883b321f60,A57F5B6E1247,This neglect isn't the fault of the candidates though. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+82346e47683e,A57F5B6E1247,"There is no childish, frivilolus blame to be placed. Simply stated, the fault lies in our electoral college system. The candidates are just playing the game of the electoral college. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+af08c373434c,A57F5B6E1247,The counterclaim for my argument may suggest that the certainty of outcome and the expulsion of run-off elections is enough to substantiate the electoral college. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+78eefee8481e,A57F5B6E1247,Are you saying that America doesn't have the time to recount votes to ensure the prosperity of the American people. Is that the messege you want to project? ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+22d2646417b7,A57F5B6E1247,The certainty of outcome is ludicrous as well. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9babcc11ba4d,A57F5B6E1247,"Source 3, ""In Defense to the Electoral College"", even admits that the electoral college is a non-democratic method of selecting a president (lines 15-17). Liars, we are liars then. Americans project an image of America to the world that we are a peacful democracy. However, if the way that we select our leaders isn't even democratic, why are we portraying this false mirage. The electoral college is an anachronism (lines 15- 16). We are a stage four country on the demographic treansitions model. Therefore, our aspirations should be looking forward and not rooted in the past. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b08143b12654,A57F5B6E1247,The electoral college system is a mock of the American people and an outdated idea that does not fit in with our current state as a whole. ,Position,Effective,,,
+48bac3161f3e,A57F5B6E1247,A win by the popular vote is much more commendable by a landslide victory on false pretences. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+706e195b3f2e,A59032F47FAE,The technology and cars has made the developers to invest on cars. The cars have all change time by having something in common . The cars that have been used for this technology is made by google. Google its a company that has internet wireless and its a huge company that only makes technology better. The car that has been desing has many manifactures going on . When they build a the workers they all have their positions and if i would be able to work in this car my position would be the antolock brakes. The antilock brakes prevents the driver to fall out of there is an actsident. Also in the article says that having unshape cars its bad or even if there is something weird of something new they think is bad ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aa5076277f54,A59032F47FAE,My conclusion is that if you think that havind an unshaped car is bad or even if it looks weird dont think that its a bad car because technology its changing our daily lifes and how we see the un expected about it. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+960cfcdbb40b,A59C88B945A3,"I don't think its Aliens, it has to be the way the land formed its self. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b746eb988cb4,A59C88B945A3,"My space partner totally disagrees with me, saying that it is aliens ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+407d22523370,A59C88B945A3,"Some people believe in Aliens unlike me. We have not discovered any site of Aliens for a very long time, intill we discovered this face. How could Aliens even do this? Did the Alien just die and sit there for 10,000 years? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eddd4b1ba527,A59C88B945A3,It is very possible for landform to make a odd looking face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4b761f5daa3,A59C88B945A3,"My space patner thinks that Aliens made the face by dieing and sittig there for s long time. He thinks that they are so smart they made that face to drag humans into Mars. Some Alien maybe had to make a sacrifice? I think that landform and the sun had something to do with it. The sun probably melted some land, or maybe it moved just right to make this face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3227b90811dc,A59C88B945A3,"The fact that ""The Face of Mars"" got popular and got out there suprised me ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+139e72819d80,A59C88B945A3,"I would be kinda shocked though, if I was someone at home and someone comes and tells me ""They descovered a Face on Mars"". I would defentely be a little curious. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+73e74b4b1b30,A59C88B945A3,Me and my partner have came to a conclusion that it was landform. That there is still no site of Aliens. That dosen't mean we woun't stop looking. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b7a46e1153f6,A5A55FE930C4,"Today, technology is rapidly advancing virtually everywhere. The iPhone, electric cars, large appliances, and many more useful new technological inventions have improved and helped assist everyone with their everyday tasks in a quick and resourceful manner. The new technology of the modern world is in workplaces, homes, and best of all, schools. Technology in school has rapidly increased especially as every student at Generic_School now has their own laptop for their own educational use. Now every student can get their work done through a computer at school, but not every student or teacher prefers it. Therefore, today, some schools offer distance learning for students to attend classes from home by way of online testing and course learning on their own. Many students and especially parents are skeptical of these online distance courses because they think that the old fashioned way of staying in school and using paper and pencil is the optimal way of learning. On the other hand, many people think otherwise, so this has become a great debate in the system of education for many counties and individual schools. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9f539909e4a2,A5A55FE930C4,Students would benefit from being able to attend or complete a class from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7c2fc61dde63,A5A55FE930C4,because they can still complete their course or courses task's at home even if they're sick ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fd789ad8567a,A5A55FE930C4,"some students don't enjoy public school so taking courses at home is more comfortable for those, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+20ba883d5e46,A5A55FE930C4,many teachers prefer that their course be taken online at home anyway due to the course's content and structure because it can help the student perform better. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+36a8e0147893,A5A55FE930C4,"First, a big reason that a student falls behind and under performs in a class is because they missed school due to being sick and they weren't able to learn it when they got back. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c5b1ba7600db,A5A55FE930C4,"Attending a class online at home is a great way to stay on pace and not fall behind because all of the information is at the student's fingertips and they can complete their tests and assignments when they are ready and able. They can still also do everything at home while they are sick if they would really like, since all of their materials is already with them on their computer. This way, the student will not fall behind in class, there is less stress, and they won't under perform on their exams because they are still able to learn the information they need on their laptop as usual. On the other hand, if a student is sick and cannot go to school that day, they miss all of their class papers and notes from that day and cannot usually make up what they missed. For this reason, online courses are a much safer and reliable way of learning that do not have the stress of missing a full day of information at school. Online courses may also have to be used for every course anyway before long due to the rapid spread and worry over the lethal Corona Virus, which can close schools and put people in quarantine for weeks. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+23ab71e24646,A5A55FE930C4,"Next, many students today are uncomfortable at a public school setting, so they are unable to perform as well in their classes and they don't do well with other people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+132ba98d998f,A5A55FE930C4,"Some are just naturally shy and others just simply do not like working with others. For this reason, attending online classes at home is a great alternative for these students who are not socially comfortable. This way, students can complete projects on their own at home and they can stay focused on their tasks without the awkward feeling of having to worry about others at public school. Another strong quality of attending and completing an online course is that many online courses have fun and interactive lessons that keep a student engaged in the lesson, rather than sitting in a classroom and doing nothing because they are bored of the teaching or they are once again, just uncomfortable socially in a public setting. One on one online video conferencing is also easier for students to talk to their teachers if they need help because they may feel uneasy when speaking to a teacher or others in person. As a result, they also can learn things in an online course that they may not have ever learned if they were taking that certain course in a public school setting. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d8b52e5042ce,A5A55FE930C4,"Lastly, many teachers prefer and advise that a course be taken online and at home due to the structure and content of the course because they believe the students will perform stronger by taking the course online. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ffb83c5bfd9f,A5A55FE930C4,"For example, many students take Econ and Personal Finance online at home during the summer because it doesn't necessarily need a full school year to complete and it can all be self taught through interactive lessons and simulations. These simulations could include learning to complete a tax form or something of the sort that can be completed individually. Also, many English courses can be taken online and some teachers encourage it because many English classes are writing oriented, in which much of the class involves writing essays and research papers on a computer anyway. Therefore, just attending a course such as these at school can be extra work and a potential waste of a students time since it can all be self taught and completed at home online. Teachers specifically may prefer online courses a lot of the time because they do not want to repeat the same exact information to every single one of their class periods and that is usually self explanatory anyway. When courses are taken online at home, the teachers are able to structure the course into interactive courses that can be self taught and completed individually, so that the students can be more successful on their own, rather than taking up a lot of extra time that is unnecessary at a classroom in school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cffd881660de,A5A55FE930C4,"
+In conclusion, attending and completing online courses at home would be beneficial to students because the course may be learned individually without the social stress of public school, the students won't fall behind if they are sick, and many teachers advise attending courses online due to their students abilities to perform stronger in the course and its better online structure. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+71d34dbbaae0,A5DD0CEFE045,Students should not be required to perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+bd1d2449fb1d,A5DD0CEFE045,Students should not have to do community service because it is the students time and it should be up to them on how they should use it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ec9ec813b22e,A5DD0CEFE045,"The students would be unhappy with this decision and maybe some parents would too. This would cause the school to have unpleasant school days, knowing they will have to do community service when they get home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+811c15f15c1b,A5DD0CEFE045,some families may even move out of the school district because of this. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a7a3f0daf1a,A5DD0CEFE045,"Requiring students to do community service also goes against human rights, nobody is able to make them do community service. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f8023ea897d9,A5DD0CEFE045,It is not justified to make them do community service because you think they should and you are the principle. People will be unhappy with your decision if you go through with this. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+389ab01ec6f2,A5DD0CEFE045,Students should not be required to do community service because it will be a conflict with their extracurricular and sports activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2f7953888ab9,A5DD0CEFE045,"Athletes will have to cut practices short because they have to do community service, thus for not allowing them to become better at their sport. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+29c93879b2f0,A5DD0CEFE045,if you make the students do community service I am sure many people will be unhappy. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e29e4af2dd45,A5DDC612408C,"I think your idea of allowing students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phone are turned off during class time, might be the best or possible policy ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7d60d2c1466c,A5DDC612408C,"i don't think that its fare to not allow phones in school at all. I know that were' re in school and we are there to learn, but shouldn't we be able to have some kind of reward for doing school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+553be362e796,A5DDC612408C,sometimes there are student that doesn't do any work and just sit at text all day ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+affe8b1bb312,A5DDC612408C,but what about the others. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+99e7b7b2fc49,A5DDC612408C,I would say that if you do happened to see ANY student texting in class or on their phone period then you would probably have to take it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00936d5bd860,A5DDC612408C,"it's bad enough we have to wear uniforms, now we cant have phone either. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5eb07338a74d,A5DDC612408C,"If the principle did decide to not let phones into schools at all, then i really wouldn't understand why ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8cab67134942,A5DDC612408C,because i know that us students are tired of hearing the same thing over and over again about cell phones killing or taking over our brain sells ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb7bdbe287ff,A5DDC612408C,I think the best way for the principle to pick which policy would be to let the students vote on it and if policy one gets picked then the principle would just have to do something about the students that are using their phones in school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e700e87537b,A5DDC612408C,I can see a lot of students being sneaky and conniving by using their phones in school. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+711c336ace86,A5DDC612408C,So to tell the truth it really doesn't matter to me if the principle picks policy 1 or 2. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7b440a4051df,A5DDC612408C,I think that students are concentrated in their phone then they on their school work. And it would be there fault when the do bad on a test or even when they loose their phone or get there phone taken. And that's all i would have to say because it wouldn't be on the principle it would be on the student. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+476d39fd26c5,A5F662EBF690,we should keep the Electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2f9882583e4c,A5F662EBF690,"The college is a process,not a place. The process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice. The counting of electoral voters by congress. State's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cf95ecc8165e,A5F662EBF690,The college is widely regarded as an anachronism. The Electoral college despite its lack of Democratic Pedigree. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6abc210d5174,A5F662EBF690,"We shouldnt have to change to election by popular vote for President. The Electoral college looks like a big help to President. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president. The collge has many electors.270 electoral voters is required to elect the president.
+
+Under 23rd amendemnt of constitution district of columbia is allocated 3 electors ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c851db335ff3,A5F662EBF690,It could be arugues the Electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters. There may be a few things i dont agree with about the Electoral college. I dont like how voters dont vote for the presidnt but for slate of electors. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c1c1afc0b17d,A5F662EBF690,"The Electoral college is one by far the best things, It dont need to be taken from us. Many good things the college does. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+beb233566a9d,A5F662EBF690,"State Senator, We should keep the Electoral college. The process is great. There are many great things about the Electoral college. Its a big help with alot. Theres no dobut about the College.      ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+4472ebe82e7d,A602D45D22B2,"Scientist Rafael, There's no way it was created by aliens, I think it was just a natural landform ",Position,Adequate,,,
+30328d0b7f42,A602D45D22B2,"on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos, Anyway thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5bb19f49252d,A602D45D22B2,"There was no alien monument after all, So Scientist Rafael that's proof, that it can't be created by aliens and it's a natural landform, well that's one of the evidence. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a14054f161a,A602D45D22B2,"Also, in Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. ""We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,"" said Garvin. ""Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution."" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+595c1e356a52,A602D45D22B2,"So I think it'similar, the picture actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f9c3500259d,A602D45D22B2,"""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+56d1467ac4f4,A602D45D22B2,"From 1976 to 2001, the images changed into a human face formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7a4cf2d92c8,A602D45D22B2,"That doesn't mean it was created by aliens and besides, we didn't find no ancient civilization on Mars ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b0712c01ade,A602D45D22B2,"I think it was a natural landform and that's all the evidence that i have for you, ""Scientist Rafael."" ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2f7c70f6b297,A61D07193089,This policy is unreasonable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+051422e02ba5,A61D07193089,it is because some kids that love sports only have a c average and are trying their hardest ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee261206914d,A61D07193089,"Also when you take away sports and other activities from students, you are taking away their exercise. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e83bdeb269b,A61D07193089,When you take away a students exercise you could make them have a risk of death. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f75db209996,A61D07193089,"Also some kids might have a disorder that will keep them away from doing their work, and can only get a c average. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+13ef24da7171,A61D07193089,"And those kids with disorders might love sports or other activities, and you are keeping them away from that. Wouldn't you feel bad knowing you would be taking away something that other people love to do. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2603bad8fbdb,A61D07193089,Also what could happen is that the people that can only get a c average could get mad or jealous at the people with a b average or better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1baa48e2397,A61D07193089,So that would cause a lot of problems in school. There could be more fights then usual. Or people could just stop caring about their grades if they cant get better then a c average trying their hardest. This problem could get you fired because it wouldn't be a good school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18bcfad27975,A61D07193089,So say some kids at your school are having a rough time at home and the only thing that makes them happy is sports. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a90f9ad230ee,A61D07193089,But they only have a c average because of their home life. They wont be happy ever again if they cant do what they love. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efb1f07efc36,A61D07193089,"What happens when a kid that has a b average, gets one bad grade and goes down to a c average in the middle of the season and is the best player? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+53f96a94411f,A61D07193089,All I'm saying is that it wouldn't be fair to the students if you were to follow through with this policy. Too many kids love sports and have a c average.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4a886480d42b,A6504C463F7E,"Have you ever thought the ""Face on Mars"" might be made by something extraterstrial? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+034aef9a216f,A6504C463F7E,"Well I'm here to prove to you its not.
+
+Here are my three examples that prove that its just a mesa ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e4642740c89a,A6504C463F7E,First there are mesas on Earth and in pictures fom Mars theres a lot ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d87a9264e206,A6504C463F7E,"Second NASA took pictures of the mesa in 2001 and used ""high resolution images and 3D altimetry"" to show what it really looks like, and it doesnt look like a face ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d18b79bba530,A6504C463F7E,Lastly it would be beneficial to NASA for them to say its aliens ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b230ffe4067,A6504C463F7E,"One reason why it's just a mesa is, theres lots of mesas on Earth and Mars ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+350457edbaab,A6504C463F7E,"An example of this would be ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho"". This is why its not a face but just a mesa ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31a2f7db3c9b,A6504C463F7E,"In the picture its a lot clearer then the one took in 1976. They did this by using ""New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry"" to clear the picture up. This is another reason why its not a alien made object but a mesa ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+11a06a13e60f,A6504C463F7E,Lastly it would be beneficial for NASA to say that it was aliens ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1939b16a8e87,A6504C463F7E,it would beneficial to them because people would be giving more money to them to try and find the aliens. this is yet another reason why it's not aliens ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a14242a1ca3b,A6504C463F7E,To conclude these are the reasons why its not aliens. NASA would get more funding if they said it was aliens. They took a clearer picture of it in 2001 and it proved it wasnt a face. Lastly we have lots of mesas on Earth and someone siad theyd seen one like The Face on Mars by a river in Idaho ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ccff65cccab5,A67828F23302,yes ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+20c9c8b5f626,A67828F23302,it is good that they the people that is causeing the damange to the cars pay for they responsibility that they have car insurance so that they can help them with there problems ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+143bee8adb5b,A67828F23302,It is good that have navigation in there car so that they know that they will not have any problems with there destinations ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b8464d35b573,A67828F23302,"But it is by the law to keep all the passengers safe by them wearing seat belts just in case of any accident.
+
+It will help if every person have on a seat or may get pulled ova by the law so it wont be no tickets going around so that mean by the person skills ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2a0fc368ad0,A67828F23302,it would help to make sure that person thats driving is doing what they are suppose to be doing at the time that they are driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a90236fcfdf7,A67828F23302,"GM has developed drivers seats that vibrates when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object traffic jam assissant the car handle driving functions at the speed limit of 25 mph but special touch sensrs make sure the drivers keep hold of the wheel. the combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.
+
+The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. these smart road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was too expensive to be practical. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b53010650892,A67A947BBFB7,"Politicts have been around for centuries; politics were made to keep the peace and give everyone a fair expresion to the people. We have all herd of people in political standpoint have been corrupt, but what if our own voting system was corrupt and our votes have never made a diffrence in selecting a president by the people. When we vote for our selected president is it really going to change or make a diffence on who gets elected... right? ""of course it will make a diffrence."" As long as your states electors dont choice by who they feel is the best fit for presidency. On another note what about the Electoral college votes. Why does one canidate always get all the electoral college votes from one state? Why cant we just revert to how many votes the canidate gets? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f2dfe47a10a0,A67A947BBFB7,"When getting down to the nitty-gritty bits of the Electoral College voting system it is a bit unfair in the ways it works in a whole, but that doesnt mean we have to abolish it and start over. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+6cd3c0267aca,A67A947BBFB7,The Electoral College voting system has worked for many years ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6041dadcf5f8,A67A947BBFB7,"In stead of just getting rid of the Electoral voting system maybe we should tweek it in a bit that makes everyone happy and makes it completly fair. Each state picks how it gives its Electoral votes, but in most states its a ""winner takes all."" When a state desides its going to be a ""winner takes all"" state, that means when voting all the Electoral votes will go to the canidate with the most amount of elector votes. Instead of using the winner takes all system each electoral votes should be given fairly. When electors votes for its canidates by the people that single Electoral vote should go to that canidate. When doing this people are in-tern voting for there canidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e01aa43dee9c,A67A947BBFB7,"Now that they Electoral votes are being distubuted evenly there is a smaller problem we face. Electors are the people who actully vote for our presidential canidate. Very rarely do these electors not choose the canidate based on the amount of votes they have been given, but it does happen. The electors are in a way chosen randomly but most of the time are chosen by the presidential canidate. Often these canidates do the right thing and vote based on votes gifen to him by the public ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3430f645a338,A67A947BBFB7,When these electors vote they are not well regulated ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+830a21a1abc4,A67A947BBFB7,What we should do is have a sort of security system that alows us the make sure our electors do the right thing ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8613ac5b3aae,A67A947BBFB7,instead on relying on someones trust worthyness we should have a system that counts the publics votes. When the elector is done with his final vote we would then see if he voted based on public votes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71d2f088e47a,A67A947BBFB7,"We the people are faces with another way of voting. We can vote for whatever canidate we please and when done with we will see how many people voted for each canidate, and whoever has the most wins right? This system would most likely give one the canidates an unfait advantage. When Romney and Obama went head to head in 2012 obama won because the amount of Electoral votes, but if we did it by the number of votes it would have been almost completly tied in votes. since Romeny was born in the south most likely each state in the south would vote for Romney. Since Obama was born in Hawiia there is no state near Hawiia that would have the same oppinion ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2c18be1739d,A67A947BBFB7,So when using just plain votes one canidate would most likely have an unfair advantage based on the size and populating of each state going for that presidential canidate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0799d534b315,A67A947BBFB7,"When suming it all up the Electoral College voting system is in a way a bit unfair, but when using the method given each Electoral vote would be given fairly instead of a winner takes all system. When going for just plain voting it would most likely turn out unfair or a lot of tied runnings. When given the facts the Electoral College is fine as it is but can be unfair and that is why we should use this method in the next following elections.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ba47fb0b7cc3,A67D3F549FAD,"Imagine you are attending classes at home you wouldn' t take it seriously as you do at school. Kids who are home schooled don't usually focus as much as they would at school. Some kids parents or tutor would give them more advantages that aren't given at school. Such as more breaks, better food options for lunch,linear schedule, and starting and ending time being optional. If students are learning a specific lesson by a video conference they wouldnt benefit the lesson as well as being offline. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b2f02abf8584,A67D3F549FAD,"Students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they would take advantage, start on their own time, and they wouldn't understand the lesson. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+92d9d940ca1a,A67D3F549FAD,Schools shouldn't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by video conferencing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+420a58b34d0b,A67D3F549FAD,"I used to baby sit this little girl named Generic_Name she went to school for two years now shes in the third grade and her parents are homeschooling her. Sometimes Generic_Name goes out to eat for lunch and she wakes up later than normal elementary kids do. Learning a lesson through a video isn't very beneficial for some students because they probably need more help understanding. The teacher can explain the lesson in a different way if the student doesn't understand but if they keep watching the video it isn't going to help them. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c661e3e3dfd,A67D3F549FAD,"Although,some may believe schools should offer distance learning as an option for students because they need a numerous amount of breaks, they should be able to work on their own time, and it's the same as an online class. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7cf3a3ac3275,A67D3F549FAD,"Distance learning is the same thing as taking online classes or taking a college class online. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a62cc7da1964,A67D3F549FAD,Distance learning shouldn't be an option this is important because it can affect the way kids learn and how they understand it. Students can be thinking of the lesson in a different format than how the lesson is expressed in the video conference. It was important in the past being it wasn't and option because they didn't have the technology resources that we have today. It helps in the future because instead of going to college you can take an online college class and you would already have experience from it. If you are attending classes from home then you switch your routine and go to school you are going to be more experienced with online conferencing and you are going to be wanting to do everything on your own.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d99d89e404bc,A681057AC54F,I think that the Face they saw in 1976 was just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b487b42b49b,A681057AC54F,My first reason why I think it was just a natural landform is becasue first of all I am a scientist and I'm not suppose to think aliens and that kind of stuff exist ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b55555fbf5c4,A681057AC54F,"Secondly, on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor took a picture of Cydonia for the first time all they saw was just a natural landform ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec304f326687,A681057AC54F,"One of my other reasons why is becasue we thought it was just a Martian mesa, witch are very common in Cydonia. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6bef64f03fb1,A681057AC54F,My last reason is becasue with the 3D high-resolution images from NASA's MGS it shows that it was just a mesa. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ce3bec002e5,A681057AC54F,Those were all my reasons why I think it was a natural landform not an alien ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87c69ed3c7f6,A6B380D5DEBB,I think that policy 1 is the best choice. I think this because that's what all students from school need cell phones. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+372fc8ac2fbc,A6B380D5DEBB,"The students might need cell phones because, maybe they don't know who to go with or if their mom or dad is picking them up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6ca1e4618976,A6B380D5DEBB,"Another reason to bring cell phones to school is if something really bad happens in the school or to you and the office is trying to call your parents and our parents don't know the school office number, can call our parents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c23eacc9d5cc,A6B380D5DEBB,"The most important reason for letting students bring cell phones to school is so they can get in contact with their parents. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b75e1a1a168,A6B380D5DEBB,"I also think that policy 2 is a good choice for no letting students bring cell phones to school, because if the students have their cell phones with them. the students might get distracted during class period, and not pay attention. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5ed13f80f8dc,A6B380D5DEBB,If the principal allows students to bring cell phones to school he should led the upper grades to bring cell phones. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+aee92573ff89,A6B380D5DEBB,"For some students it's important to bring their cell phones, to be in contact with their parents, or uncles. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1422f989f3d8,A6B380D5DEBB,Another reason to bring cell phones to school is if we out of school super early and our parents don't know that we got out early. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+64aa560478b8,A6B380D5DEBB,The facts of reading this letter are so you can decide if students should bring cell phones to school. How about if you Mr. principal caught students with their cell phones during classes and if they are not paying attention you should suspend them for having their cell phones in class. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f952c4298864,A6B490224E67,"In 1976 Viking fly to Mars, and when they orbit/circle the mars they see a big head that look like pharoah head. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7ce89559bd86,A6B490224E67,I think that the head was form by itself when the heat from Mars rise and it burn some of the rock and form the big head. I don't think it was made by alien because if they were in Mars they would burn when the sun come or when the heat rise from Mars ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+db158591195a,A6B490224E67,If it were made by alien then we would see their foot print or some symbol or marking that is unusual to Earth. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21dd91596a64,A6B490224E67,"The people who was there to take this photo said it was ""Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American west"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c2fa2c1e6d6,A6B490224E67,"It said that on ""April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars orbiter camera (MOC) team snapped a picture 10 time sharper then the original Viking photo"". ""There was no alien monument after all"". So, the head was created by landform and if there were alien they would have seen them or take a photo of them but there was none so it was created by landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc3b7188a05f,A6B490224E67,"In conclusion, the head that was on Mars was actually created by landform, not by alien because if it was created by alien then they would have seen them when they orbit the Mars and also it is not alien monument it is actually the ""Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American west"".     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5b9d22922087,A6CD1CF86FC6,"Garbage on the grass, gum on the sidewalk that's what we see on our normal routine to school. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3ea442fb6b14,A6CD1CF86FC6,The school should do community service on their community ,Position,Effective,,,
+79438d81eab8,A6CD1CF86FC6,"because It will help the environment, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63bdb5649336,A6CD1CF86FC6,"it will help the student to become more responsible, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bcfac4daf761,A6CD1CF86FC6,and because it will have a good affect to the community. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40682e93b0b6,A6CD1CF86FC6,"Global warming is a immense topic to the whole entire world because it's affecting everybody from City to animal life. If we take this step in the school we would be reducing the amount of garbage in the streets which might affect everybody. We will be able to see cleaner streets, the school will even have a better image than it does right now. Now the grass will last longer and so will the trees. We would see the space we might have left from all that garbage it used to occupy, and if that space is free, we could add something that could come in handy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+59a028804feb,A6CD1CF86FC6,"Every time, theirs a student that doesn't care and leave their garbage on the floor. If we open up this program we could make students more responsible to the school. If the students see the hard work some people take to clean the school environment they would appreciate the work they done and might not want to throw their garbage on the floor like they used to. They would see that since now its them that pick up the garbage and not other people they would be more responsible and throw it the garbage can. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ce36dd1d624,A6CD1CF86FC6,"If the program is open up the community would have a better image of itself. The trees and the grass would look healthier, the school would even have a better image too. Graffiti that used to cover up some buildings walls, would now look even better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7442f9fd2110,A6D70DC96AB3,The Electoral College does infact work for most states in USA minus Nebraska and maine. The santor should keep the Electoral College to keep the presidents and vice presidents intact ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fecaa5d6081c,A6D70DC96AB3,Without it we the people wont focus at the process of the Electoral College and will become history of dissapointment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d34d34975b1,A6D70DC96AB3,"The Electoral College consists more then 538 electors wich keeps this place together, without them what else would they do to help the country? More then 270 electoral vote helps people pick wich president would be best for this country. If we didn't have the Electoral College we would likely have bad presidents that would use they're power to have ""fun"" with this country for they're enjoyment. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a069757ea7d3,A6D70DC96AB3,"So some people may hate the process, but its because of winner-takes-all system. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3769f9958b19,A6D70DC96AB3,"Some people will see a campaign ad and think that person should or should not win the election, and have a good argument about that person, but at the same time they trust that person. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44a3c4488681,A6D70DC96AB3,sometimes the votes that voters vote for may not or may not go to the person that voted for ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cdf4c39e145d,A6D70DC96AB3,but that isnt a big issue bigeest out of all the people in the USA the vote that they did made a person feel happy about themselves because it shows that some amount of people care.     ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+694fb9ca2a70,A70FB3B842D7,Have you ever wondered if the famous face on mar's is just there naturally or was it put there by aliens well it was actually just there naturally. Scientist's have proven that this famous face from magazines and once starred in a hollywood film is just a natural landform in a region of mar's called Cydonia. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+9d2dbd607865,A70FB3B842D7,This face is just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d017ca543df5,A70FB3B842D7,"and how we know its a natural landform is because the article states, "" It's just a huge rock fromation, Formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth"". It's not an alien monument It's just a natural landform on mar's. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+59c77ce3ee46,A70FB3B842D7,"So that is why this iconic face of the 1970's and 80's is just part of the planet mar's itself and wasn't put there by another living speicies on mar's like aliens It's just some shadow's that come together a little bit to give the illusion of eye's, a nose, and a mouth in the region of Cydonia. This face was also discovered in the late 1970's specifically 1976. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+dc4791dbba1d,A723DDC8ABF0,"Community Service has always been a debated issue between students. Some find community service an enjoyable experience while others think that community service takes up too much of their free time. I agree with community service being an enjoyable experience. It is a relief to know you can make someone else's life easier and it's an exciting feeling to know that all the hard work you put forth will be appreciated. However, some students find community service boring and something will take up too much of their free time. I do have some suggestions of how we can fix this problem, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+72f5e9e38680,A723DDC8ABF0,but I believe that community service will be a value to our education and should be required by your school ,Position,Effective,,,
+295031767ac0,A723DDC8ABF0,"Community Service is basically helping others in a way where you accept nothing in return. Some activities that are community service include picking litter up around your neighborhood, visiting the elderly, helping a teacher, etc. It's the little things we can do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3bee95853c3,A723DDC8ABF0,Community service will be beneficial to our school because it will help the students learn self value. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7691f49b4b96,A723DDC8ABF0,The reason for this is because the student may learn that just by helping someone that it can mean a whole lot to that one person, which may or may not lead them to realising the important things in life and the things they value. ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+80d99ab7a760,A723DDC8ABF0,The student might find community service as 'fun' if we advertise the activities in a way that will make them think of enjoyable and not hard work or boring. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35565d4dd079,A723DDC8ABF0,Then there is the issue of students believing that community service takes too much of their free time. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f29f0ac52246,A723DDC8ABF0,I feel for this we need to have a limitation for the amount of hours required ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+521d53eeb742,A723DDC8ABF0,"In consideration to my previous statement, if we make the activities seem more like a hobby instead of a chore then students will be more willing to join in. Then, maybe, this will cause a domino effect where one student will tell their friends how exciting community service is and this will lead more children to participate. For Ex: When a group of students are going to clean the litter in their neighborhood, they could make this into a sport. Where the kids grab the trash, like bottles or paper, and they throw it into the garbage bag or recycling bin as if they were playing basketball. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9db627f84b90,A723DDC8ABF0,Most students find community service important because there are many advantages to it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3faf4df8b91,A723DDC8ABF0,"Like if students help tutor kids; this will be beneficial to those kids who can't afford it or really need it. Then there's helping a teacher out, even if its just sorting her books or organizing her papers; this will make their lives easier and that specific person may start to gain a friendship with the teacher. The reason for that is you will see that teacher for quite some time and the two of you may speak to each other and carry out conversations with one other. Students can also visit the elderly which can be an amazing experience; the kid can teach that elderly person a few things and they might share their experiences, knowledge, and tips. This can lead to a friendship where both parties enjoy each other's company. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+040341c9a6ba,A723DDC8ABF0,For such reasons I believe community service is something that should be cherished   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2ca664b26cfd,A7642F5617E0,"I understand that some people in this world do not care about our community at all, but it is very important to at least try to change it ",Lead,Effective,,,
+442055961cc7,A7642F5617E0,Requiring students to do community service will make keep our community a clean and safe environment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f96952487652,A7642F5617E0,"Therefore, I believe that community service should be required for students at school not everyday, but at least maybe twice a week. ",Position,Effective,,,
+ef7ae807c71b,A7642F5617E0,"By doing this, you and everyone else who participates in this should be rewarded, but at the same time take responsibility to keep on making this place better for everybody. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2a022db8ce67,A7642F5617E0,Some students may help with tutoring other students who needs help with schoolwork or something along the lines of that. Other people go around picking trash up of the ground and putting it where it belongs and trying their best to keep our environment clean. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+2f8fdcdae002,A7642F5617E0,"Today, we still have people going around throwing trash on the grounds. I myself, have experienced people putting trash on the grounds and leaving it there. It hurts me because everyday I look at how much work people put into making schools, office buildings, restaurants, and etc. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+14697bf3dee7,A7642F5617E0,"I hope that you have learned a lot from this and go along with requiring students to do community service no matter what it is they are doing. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+44f48d20e57b,A774A4991BB1,The Electoral College has been here since the founders of this country put it in our Constitution to please both sides. This Electoral College has made a lot of history in our great nation and we appreciate what it has done for us. It's a huge part of our election process ,Lead,Effective,,,
+2140adeedfdf,A774A4991BB1,is time we move on from it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a768b796c122,A774A4991BB1,Their have been to many instances where a presidential candidate has had the popular vote but has lost because he didn't have enough electoral votes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+25149813809,A774A4991BB1,"""It happened in 200, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888"" (source 3) This may have not happened more than twice but this could easily happen again and cause a catastrophe. This is why I disapprove of the electoral college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8168400afa65,A774A4991BB1,This process is also unfair to voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+98a52906af9f,A774A4991BB1,"because when they vote for a president they are really voting for electors. The elctors can be any citizen so the voters don't know who the electors are. Voters can rarely decide who the electors vote for which puts them at a disadvantage and is an inconvience for the voters. ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president"" (source 2). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c46836b7fde,A774A4991BB1,There has been several of organizations and people who have tried to get the electoral college deleted from election processes ,Claim,Effective,,,
+58f23da0b3ba,A774A4991BB1,"including ..."" Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole , the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO"" (Source 2). These are multiple people with proven track records and are some of many who are ready for change. The electoral college has brought good and bad to our country but there are times when things should be left in the past. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0f805300b940,A774A4991BB1,Using the popular vote as the one and only way of electing presidents is needed in this country. The choice of presidents should be soley up to the american people. There should be no electoral college that can totally change the outcome of a election because one candidate doesent have enough electoral votes. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fd755da3a90d,A791047275B9,First off i would like to tell you what a electoral college is ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e182bfafb080,A791047275B9,"It is a process when a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The founding fathers established it in the constitution.
+
+The process consist of the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The elctoral college consist of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president.
+
+Each canidate running for president in tour state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by the canidatespolitical party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.
+
+The presidential electon is held every four years on a tuesday after the first monday in november. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb0eb1fdb81c,A791047275B9,We help choose our states electors when we vote for the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6ad671293f5,A791047275B9,because wahen we vote for our canidates we are voting for our canidates electors. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8459104a2daa,A791047275B9,We have to save the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+809dbaaf3d63,A791047275B9,because we have to have 270 electoral votes to have a president ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e7e379d02e2,A791047275B9,If we got ride of it there would be no president or we would have to come up with an idea related to the electoral college ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c8dadcea5bc4,A791047275B9,Thats why we should keep the elctoral college.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d33319540956,A798DC70F3FC,Dear state senator i really think we should keep the electoral college. I mean look at how far we have come in are lives were we have kept this system working for years and it has not faild us yet ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dc956b44e718,A798DC70F3FC,If we try to change IT now we will probally screw every thing up and it will probally be to confusing because of how the world is today. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f9a3a9f5260,A798DC70F3FC,If you look back at the probloms we had in the past we got passed them and came back stronger and improved we really just need new electors and just keep the system the same but get out with the old people and in with the new ones ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c73e2f87e155,A798DC70F3FC,This method is a non democratic method also ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cbbb60b819ee,A798DC70F3FC,this method also cant get any more fair because the people vote who they want and whoever has more votes then they win. whats not fair about that? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0dd36d487928,A798DC70F3FC,the electoral college avoids the problom of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast. I really think we should keep this method ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ded351eee7e8,A7A467BDEE14,"America: land of the free, the brave, and millions of proud citizens who live in a country that prides itself on its preservation of human rights and everything else that makes up a proper society. However, in order to remain a fair republic that truly takes into account the opinions of all citizens, we must make one major change. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6865d168f3e5,A7A467BDEE14,The flawed Electoral College must be abolished and replaced with election by popular vote in order to ensure the well being of our country. ,Position,Effective,,,
+ffe42c0cb937,A7A467BDEE14,"Proponents of the Electoral College would gasp in horror at this suggestion, arguing that their systematic method is virtually foolproof ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c655b27ebac6,A7A467BDEE14,"Nevertheless, with a voting method as complicated as the Electoral College, the room for error is far too great. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c611a6072e62,A7A467BDEE14,"Just look at what happened in 1960, when racist legislators tried to replace the democtratic electors  chosen by popular vote in order to sabotage John F. Kennedy's chances. Then yet another electoral disaster occured in 2000. Both of these events could very easily happen again and the consequences of such mistakes are unfathomable. History has been proven to repeat itself, and this is no exeption. Who's to say that electors won't just ignore the wishes of voters or that legislators won't manipulate the system? When it comes to choosing our leade, whose actions will ultimately decide whether or not America will continue to survive and thrive, it would be a huge mistake to leave this resposibility to one group of individuals. After all, nobody is perfect. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d84061f2eee9,A7A467BDEE14,"Furthermore, advocates of the Electoral College make a major fallacy when they claim that voters in swing states are more informed on election information, therefore it's good that the electoral system causes candidates to only focus on them. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+62611c73f7f3,A7A467BDEE14,"Just consider the fact that by completely ignoring all of the other states, campaigners are ignoring millions of individuals who deserve to have a say in who will be in charge. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8229fa94e4c,A7A467BDEE14,"Through this one argument, advocates are essentially assuming anyone who doesn't live in a swing state doesn't care about the election as much and therefore they shouldn't have a say in the matter. This is simply not true. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d6dda9d0f7d5,A7A467BDEE14,"In fact, these advocates fail to acknowledge that if voters in other states are not as educated or interested, it is a consequence of the Electoral College. While politicians are focusing all of their time and effort on the 'thoughtful' voters, other citizens don't get the information they need from seeing campaigns and meeting candidates. They are deprived of the opportunity to make an educated decision like swing voters and that is a fault of the college, not the voters themselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+17cb7d287b05,A7A467BDEE14,"If a tie were to occur, the election would be determined by members of the House of Representatives, who do an even poorer job of representing the people considering each state casts only one vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b6efe30c2422,A7A467BDEE14,"Also, due to the fact that the Electoral College mainly operates with the winner-take-all rule, it is easy for individuals in Democratic or Republican states to feel as if their vote doesn't matter. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cb03e762fa0,A7A467BDEE14,"It is also important to note that at the end of the day, election by popular vote accomplishes the goal of reflecting the opinion of the public far better than election by Electoral College. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9ba32495910c,A7A467BDEE14,"The popular vote is a clear statement of voters' opinions and is virtually unable to be tampered with. On the other hand, the Electoral College only complicates the situation by introducing a middle man who is prone to bribery and mistakes. Why should we allow candidates to win because of the electoral vote if they do not recieve the overall approval of the public? Compare the opinions of 538 electors to the opinions of hundreds of millions of voters. Evidently, the opinions of all these voters cannot be properly represented by these 538 electors. It's just impossible both logistically and logically. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3fc3134aeed0,A7A467BDEE14,"For all of these reasons, I urge you to change the system to election by popular vote. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a7804e892e5c,A7B069D3B600,Hi my names Kaigen and I am against the idea of self driving vehicles. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9648a6341538,A7B069D3B600,I honestly think it would cause more mayham ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+24cc3a1c4444,A7B069D3B600,"Just think about it, what if a deer runs out in front of your car. I know you are probably thinking they have some fool proof plan to avoid these incidents, but take out that word deer and replace it with a child. Yeah that changes things up a little huh. No matter how fool proof they claim their ""self driving"" cars are it a bad idea. Things happen, technology fails. Its a part of life.
+
+The story even says 'the driver has to take control entering or leaving a driveway', or ""if theres road work it needs the driver to take over"". This is not ok. What happens when you are going through an intersection and the light turns red? Is the car going to speed up, or stop in the middle of the road. What if you are going through a school zone? Hows the car going to know any different? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3455d4994dc8,A7B069D3B600,"They also said in the article ""for this to work it would be espensive"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+576b09b74d83,A7B069D3B600,In my opinion the last thing we need is to go even further in debt. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+701272102454,A7B069D3B600,"Yes I can see good in this idea, but i beleive the bad over rules the good in this instinse. Just imagine what would happen if a car pulled out in front of you, sure these machines will probably have a pretty good reaction time. But it can not be anywhere close to the reaction time of a frightened parent. Child saftey is the number one thing car manufactures need to be worried about. If they get the ""okay"" and come out with these i would want to see these flaws adressed before anyone puts a child in the vehicle. I am not saying its a bad idea, heck I even seee a time in the future where a car is driving me around ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8c09c44712e8,A7B069D3B600,"I just dont think they have everything figured out yet and i dont think they will have anytime soon. Its reasonable for these to come out on the market, they just need to meet all of the saftey regulations ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f4910ac8586,A7B069D3B600,"I am kaigen, and this is why I'm against a vehicle that can ""drive itself"". Plain and simple they are not safe and would cost far too much to make safe and reasonable. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8a7b13f18529,A7EA8CF2F203,"In many cases there is two sides to an arguement. When there is two sides to an arguement it could go either way. In this case the arguement is about the electoral college. What is the electoral college,it is the the process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the consitution as a compromise between election of president by a vote in congress and election of presidentby popular vote of qualilfied citizens.(stated in paragraph 1) ",Lead,Effective,,,
+031de613d335,A7EA8CF2F203,"I believe strongly that we should keep the electoral college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e962ea82ceff,A7EA8CF2F203,beacuse it keeps people from directly voting for a presdient ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c358037887be,A7EA8CF2F203,keeps everything even and mostlikely fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3d3f89e60c3,A7EA8CF2F203,"Most people think that we should get rid of the electoral college,its clearly a state of opinion. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+352bae4e4394,A7EA8CF2F203,When you really sit down and think about how most people vote in the Northeast and South they are not the thoughtful voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9929e55f42ac,A7EA8CF2F203,"(said in paragraph 19 line 2 paragraph 4) Take obama for an example, he was the first black presidental canidate and most of the darker skined group of people got excited because for the first time in history a black man could be president,many blacks thought that voting for the black president would mean that they would better respersatition in office,so many blacks and some whites voted for obama to win. Not really paying much attention to what or who they were voting for. Which you could probably figure out that obama won they had the bigger vote. If we are able to keep the electoal college it would mean that wouldnt happen agian because it could go through the electorals they would choose who is best. Dont get me wrong people actually voted for obama anyways ,because of what he  stood for but most didn't. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c3b54dec77a,A7EA8CF2F203,"In reality most people think that the voting is unfair, like what happened with Presidnet Kennedy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+be1969c113a1,A7EA8CF2F203,"Kennedy was the stronger, better canidate to be president. I believe that the electors chose right, it may not have been who the people wanted. He was way better then Nixon could ever be. That may have made the people very mad,which led to the assination of President Kennedy. Kenndey changed the country and to this day in my mind, known as one of the best presdidents we ever had. Thanks to the electoral system we had Kennedy elected instead of Nixon,could you just imagine how the country would be today. If Kennedy didnt win,or if Nixon was president just one little thing could change everything. Everything happens for a reason and having the electoral college helps. I know that Nixon has the popular vote but kennedy needed to win for the better of our country,its my state of opinion. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a88bd428d8e6,A7EA8CF2F203,"Most people think that having the electoral college is bad,why? because they believe that the people should be able to vote directly. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3703abd37c8a,A7EA8CF2F203,I understand how and why they believe that. When you think about votin directly it would insure the people that whoever they are voting for they would be sure to get thier votes and for sure get the president that they wished to be president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+90de6bd3f39d,A7EA8CF2F203,"I could truley undertsand why and this would work out, but i still strongly believe that this could be the cause to many problems. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+008f962308e1,A7EA8CF2F203,"In conclusion,I beleive that we shoudl keep the electoral college becaue he keeps the people for choosing a president direlcetly. If they make a bad chose someone,who knows is the better canidate that they could over rule the peoples vote. So it would all fair in most turns and would possibably helping the country,and many people believe otherwise its truely a state of opinion. You choose who chooses the president. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+547a6aebd039,A7EC6F462F8B,Driverless cars are the future of transportation. These types of cars will allow for the easy transportation of people without the need to take accout for human fatigue. ,Position,Effective,,,
+29c42b4b9865,A7EC6F462F8B,"Increasing technological standards along with the development of new programs are allowing for the development of driverless cars with power and complexity never before seen. While driverless cars have been a reality for mulitple years now, the technology to be able to allow them to function is just now being completed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1a75350a013,A7EC6F462F8B,"After maunufactures discovered that it would be too costly to devlop smarter roads, the focus shifted to smart cars, cars capable of driving themselves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a8935fd290e,A7EC6F462F8B,"Driverless cars would allow for the development of new transportation infrastructure and an upgrade to the traditional way of driving, as well as being more fuel efficient and more enviromentally friendly. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+802a6a4fd554,A7EC6F462F8B,"Google's own self driving cars have been able to driver over half a million miles without a crash. (Paragraph 2) Here we can see that the technology is there, it just has not been able to be implemented and the law has not caught up to where self driving cars are ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0a4ecccd5a8,A7EC6F462F8B,. People would become better connected in a world occupied by self driving cars. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+512a8b5a95f0,A7EC6F462F8B,"The reliable and more affordable use of transport that allows for the car to continue driving even after the driver has fallen asleep or become fatigued will allow for people to better communicate and be more easily connected to friends and family. New technology, like the ""LIDAR"" (Paragraph 4) becoming more readily available to the average consumer and not sitting at a price point well out of the average persons reach allows for the driverless car to become more of a reality. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f491ebe68edb,A7EC6F462F8B,"
+Even looking outside of truly driverless cars, cars that used assisted driving features, like cars made by BMW, GM, or Google, are still capable of helping the driver drive in a more safe manner. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+47058891b039,A7EC6F462F8B,"Technology has been developed that allows for the driver to be alerted to a hazerdous situation by vibrating the seats, flashing a light, or finding another way to notify the driver. (Paragraph 7) The technology is present to allow self driving cars to function, it just needs some fine tuning. Cars that have been made by these manufactures ""... can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves,"" (Paragraph 7) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2193f7244a5,A7EC6F462F8B,"It is important to understand why driverless cars propose a danger to us, however, because the benefit of an automated car is not gained without risks and challengs. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3910136d42ca,A7EC6F462F8B,"Driverless cars, at this very moment, are not capable of dealing with complicated traffic situations or roadblocks, and this is primarily the argument for why these cars should not be allowed on the open road. Other arguments include the reasoning that the enjoyment is being taken out of driving by allowing a computer to do the driving for you. In regards to that, I respond by saying that cars that will have automated features will also be able to be driven. Most are not completely autonomous and will allow for the driver to take control at their leisure. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5320aa58af53,A7EC6F462F8B,"In a hypothetical world where the autonomous car drives perfectly in all conditions, the driver would still be able to take control of the car and drive as s/he pleases and continue the drive as they wish it to be driven. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d45448371725,A7EC6F462F8B,"Some people might see a driverless car as a loss of freedom or a loss of control, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+08979033b193,A7EC6F462F8B,"but a better way to observe the idea of a driverless car is to think of it as a car, just like any other, with a few extra features; and one of those features happens to be that the car is capable of driving itself. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+16dad2992035,A7EC6F462F8B,Another argument not stated in the document was the issue of misuse of the self driving car. A major trajedy in our society is that people would possibly try to use its autonomous abilities to achieve a terrorist goal. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d343993116a2,A7EC6F462F8B,"A driverless car could be used as a weapon for a group not willing to lose their own members in a fight, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7151c931e65a,A7EC6F462F8B,but this is still not a reason to stop the development of new technology. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+de951777f128,A7EC6F462F8B,We as humans can not let fear stand in our way and give up on our evolutionary duty because we are afraid that someone else will hurt us for it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5cedc4401f61,A7EC6F462F8B,"We are required as competent members of an advanced society to continue to devlop this technological marvel and use it for the betterment of mankind. Of course evil will still exist, and it always has and always will. It is important that we continue to develop, to move on in the face of danger and not let fear take hold of us. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4eba96e1e8b,A7EC6F462F8B,"With self driving cars, the possibilities are endless. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+524507361f31,A7EC6F462F8B,"We have the power to travel anywhere and drive anywhere without worrying about fatigue or losing your way. We could leave Chicago one night, get a good nights rest, and wake up in Washington D.C., parked at your hotel. A fully developed automated car society would help to reduce the risk of collisions and would reduce emmissions that are harmful to the enviroment. Advanced technology has become more readily available to the consumer in recent years and allows for the driverless car to be cheaper and easier to produce than ever before when technology that these cars required was but a dream. Driverless cars could allow for a safer society that is more connected with transport that is cheaper and more reliable than that of the traditional car. Greater fuel efficiency and the lower enviromental impacts would promote the development of these cars by companies wishing to see a better world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+309043f78242,A7EC6F462F8B,The self driving car is the next step in the automobiles evolution.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+98e58be92fb2,A803835B8164,we should not keep the Electoral College and change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+66c7ca906be6,A803835B8164,"Primarily, the Electoral College is the selection of electors by popular vote to represent their supported party in the official presidential election. There is a total of 538 Electoral College electors and it only takes the majority, 270 votes, to elect the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+58b3024d8ba4,A803835B8164,It is not fair that the general population does not get an independent vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+57701cbeb90c,A803835B8164,It is not the ordinary people who get to choose the president they want, ,Claim,Adequate,,
+ebe44ac604be,A803835B8164,"it is dependent upon which party the elector chooses. Voters don't have control over who their electors vote for. As said in the second article, Al Gore won the popular vote in 2000 against Bush however, Gore lost the electoral vote resulting in the loss of the presidential election. In the past, there have been voters who refused to vote for their party's candidate and voted for whomever. There is also the concern of a tie in the electoral vote.
+
+If that were to happen then there would certainly be no chance that the popular vote would have an impact on the selection of the president because it would now be in the hands of the House of Representatives. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba7f470cb462,A803835B8164,The Electoral College is unfair to voters, they do not get the final choice as to where their vote goes. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+7d37cf3b6951,A803835B8164,They are not voting for the presidential candidate they want. The voters are voting for a slate of electors. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+080f8c90d523,A803835B8164,"However, there are some benefits to having an Electoral College such as larger states getting more attention from presidential candidates than smaller states and it also avoids Run-Off elections which is when no candidate recieves a majority of the votes. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+33d0e78ea687,A803835B8164,"State Senator, please realize that this is not fair or justifiable. There may be an upside to the Electoral College, however, it is in my strongest opinion based on factual content that this is not a fair method and it should be abolished. Being empathetic for the ordinary voters of the United States would provide clarity for your opinion on the situation. Imagine if you were a general voter who did not get an official vote in the presidential election; you would feel cheated also. This is why I ask you to strongly consider these legitimate words.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6989e84ffee8,A817C51F0787,"There are many things up in Mars. Some , well many, that we do not even know about. Now many believe the face on Mars was created my aliens. But, how could it be so? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+341f39837d82,A817C51F0787,"Well, because it was not.
+
+First of all how could have the aliens created an artifact. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+460f1e94dae5,A817C51F0787,How they create it as a form of a face. It's not like aliens just have tools laying around and they sculpt when they are bored. It started to form over the years. The way it was forming and the shadows around it just made it look more of a face. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+534711ecacb4,A817C51F0787,"With all honesty do you not think if NASA was 100% sure this ""face"" was created by aliens they would've announced it? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3e24569b0fc,A817C51F0787,"That would have been big proof that aliens do exist. After all scientists have been trying to look for any other life on other planets for over the years. So that just says NASA also sees it as just a natrual landform. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41e5a5057649,A817C51F0787,The face on Mars is became very popular. But not in the scientist type way. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2603c8bb8401,A817C51F0787,"It has become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film,appeared in books, magazines,radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store checkout likes for 25 years. Peopl seem to find it interesting since they are talking and mentioning it alot. I am thinking they just seem to find it interesting that aliens might have created it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60ed661de2a8,A817C51F0787,I think it is safe to say that the face on Mars is just a natrual landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e1057f9f7e28,A817C51F0787,"NASA thinks that, so maybe we shoud too. After all they are scientist and part of NASA that knows all this. Later on I know that they will fnd other thing more evidence. People might have something new to believe.                          ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c2391d7d3fab,A8411CE08C68,"The president of the United States should be decided by the Electoral College process, not by most popular vote. There are many reasons why we should keep the way we vote the same. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d66f7197d507,A8411CE08C68,"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in it's Congressional delegation: one for each member in the house of Representatives and plus two for your senators. Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. When we vote this way, there's a certainty of outcome. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College is possible, it happened in 2000, but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote.
+
+The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates to focus their campaign effforts on the toss-up states. Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the competing candidates, knowing that they are going to decide the election. The Ellectoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the Constistution.
+
+The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of votes cast, For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College. There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8f0e914ea1f6,A8411CE08C68,We definatly need to continue using the Electoral College process. The most popular vote process wouldn't be an ideal way to elect a president.   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+236282cc3811,A850DCCFB6DE,"Chossing your president is something very important and we need a way , a method to help us pick the right one. The Electoral College is the best way of picking the right president and doing it right. If you pick your president by a popular vote it would only lead to a disaster. In our world we need a method like this one that will guide us to make the right desion and something as imporatant as our President, well we can just pick out of anything we have to do it  wise and neat so the right choice is picked ",Lead,Effective,,,
+24150dff7fcc,A850DCCFB6DE,It is clear that we need to bring the Electoral College back. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f3c4fe29d010,A850DCCFB6DE,"The Electoral College is more like a process that is put in place to pick our President. It consist of the selection of the electors and then the electors vote for the President and Vice President. On source number one "" What is the Electoral College"" it states that "" The  electoral college consists of  538 electors. A  majority of 270 electorral vote is required to elect President"". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+094a47f65b0d,A850DCCFB6DE,This process is very well put together and simple. You vote for the  electors that then later on will be chossing your president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3ceb2406a7c,A850DCCFB6DE,And yes i know what some people might say that the want to choose who their  President is ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5c4cc03096d4,A850DCCFB6DE,but to be honets isn't better to have people like our electors to pick for us some one who really know about politics and about all of it. We all would be in better hands. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2ca5b90e8fa9,A850DCCFB6DE,Many people would say that it is as if they don't have right that it's unfair that someone is picking their future ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+99d24d0729e9,A850DCCFB6DE,"but its not true!!!.The people choose the electors you vote for which ever one you think will represent you best, you would vote for them. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+10a87783ddd2,A850DCCFB6DE,"The second source that I used in researching this topic is called "" In the defense of the electoral college."" This article they give you five reasons to keep our method of choosing the president. That one that was best for me was that "" Everyones's president"" just beacuse  at the end of the day what's important is choosing the right president for the job that the reason this method was created. I read the part where it say even if we do let the people vote , some people will end up feeling like their votes don't count simply cause they live in a small town with a very low population. Exsactly how it says in the article ""...a large state gets more attencion from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does."" 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e6a174f9d9a,A850DCCFB6DE,"To conclude the Electoral College method is the best way to make sure all the people are getting the president the diserve. As i said in the bigging is a good neat process that is well put together and that will help mamy people out. Voting by population  vote is not safe and it's not for sure , you may think that if you vote for a president that he will win but your wrong there is a better change of him winning if the electors vote for him then you. I hope that when you are done reading this you will understand why the Electoral College should come back and it should stay.              ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e8999b12ccf4,A860BB507256,I believe that keeping the Electoral College is the best way to vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2412003f8aad,A860BB507256,I think it would help voters vote on their own. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8aa5140e4047,A860BB507256,It would also decrease the rates for voting just a little bit. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24af2cc65e33,A860BB507256,Some people might disagree with me because they think that election by popular vote for the president of the United States would pick the best president for thier country. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8351388eb9a8,A860BB507256,"If I were old enough to vote I would want to pick the candidate who I thought would be able to lead my country in the right direction. But if the election is based on popular votes, I would feel as if my vote didnt matter. What if many people voted for one candidate but the popular vote selectes the other? Then people would feel like there is no need for voting ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a37fbb583b88,A860BB507256,We should be able to pick our own president rather than having other people decide for us ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+599e617969e9,A860BB507256,"Not evreybody has the opportunity to vote. But some people do, they just dont want to. Other dont think that their vote matters ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1641fbb1b0ce,A860BB507256,I think that the rate for voting will go down if we have to pick a president by a popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+29aa394facce,A860BB507256,"Then people who have been voting will stop voting because they would feel like there is no need to. I would feel the same way. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5b072b013d5,A860BB507256,Keeping the Electoral College would help get more voters. I believe it would increase the rates for voting. But it wont if there thinking about changing it to a popular vote. I mean I understand people might think its an easier way to vote but our voice and lives matter too. Voters should feel like voting is important. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a4cd4e024da3,A8683674019F,"The Electoral College was created by our Founding Fathers. They put this in the Constitution to make electing the President of the United States fair and equal to all the citizens in the United States. The Electoral College should not be changed no matter what. To go against the Constitution would be to go against the nation, for we were built on the leadership of our Founding Fathers and the guidance of the Constitution. This Contitstution was created so that the people have more power than the government. So I strongly believe that the Electoral College should stay the same. It is the governmet that needs to change. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0cffc1d234ca,A8683674019F,"There is nothing wrong with the Electoral College, it is just the ones that run it. So if there should be any change, it should be the government that should change, not the Electoral College! ",Position,Adequate,,,
+287499e78263,A8683674019F,"The Ectoral College is a compromise between the election of the President by a vote in Congress and by the popular vote of the citizens. When the voting starts the electors come to a meeting place and vote on who they want as President. After the meeting, there has to be a majority of two hundred seventy electoral votes for the election of the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2770ee004949,A8683674019F,"The electoral College is as I have said it before is fair and equal to all the citizens in the United States. To take this away now would be a catastraphe, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fb22f974792,A8683674019F,"because that would mean that all the other presidents in the past would not have even been our Presidents, the history behind them would be rubish and not even true. Some states may have a ""winner-take-all"" sort of thing but they are together and voting together as on state. Some of them may vote for the other one but the majority of them is for one person. Some of the states believe that it is not even worth it to have a ""winner-take-all"", because they think it is unfair. Then after the presidential election comes the ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" which is a list of all those who ran for President and there respective electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd5fb6cd98d2,A8683674019F,"The electoral college has been around ever since the Constitution was created. It may be unfair now, but if there would have been any changes to the Constitution it would have been done then instead of now. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ee88fd0d784,A8683674019F,The Electoral College was probably a great idea when the the Constitution fisrt started out. Then the years have gone by and now we want change. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32e06aa71cc7,A8683674019F,"Well I see that the Electoral College can be unfair but it is also fair in it's own right. Because of the fiasco in the year of two thousand about the abolishment of the Electoral College, it has left a scare in our nation about the government, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3476bf55ebd8,A8683674019F,"because you guys are giving out the information on the candidates to late or not at all. That SUCKS, for most states because they may not even get one advertisment about the candidates any where or even a commercial on T.V. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19a9b44c3495,A8683674019F,"If the vote for the abolishment of the Electoral College does happen, then there is nothing that I can do about it, but you can still change your ways. You can make it fair and not irrational. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a82efa0ec4e2,A8683674019F,"Even send the ""Certificate of Ascertainment"" earlier than you have done before now. This is a nation of freedom and peace, how are you trying to keep the peace with other countries if you can not even keep the peace within your own? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ae139a2d096,A8683674019F,"The government is the real problem, not the Electoral College. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc51778f405d,A8683674019F,"It may be unfair, because the majority of the people may have chosen one person while the electors may choose the other. Then when they add it together it is there vote that counts more than the peoples. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0869d65718ce,A8683674019F,"If the government had only done the right thing and elected what the people wanted, then no one would have a problem with the Electoral College. It is stupid that the government is listening to what we have to say but not hearing it completly. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+81c1525a2e81,A8683674019F,The Constitution is a document of equality for the people. Not the government. If our nations democracy is a democracy then they should listen more to what the people have to say and not what the government has to say. If the government would do this then things would run more smoothly within our country and there would be less conflict. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+662099b9fd51,A8683674019F,"This nation is a nation of freedom and peace. Not for a bunch of people who are power hungry. The Electoral College is fair and equal, it is the government that is not. If the government would only change for the better then there would be no problem. This nation is still young compared to all the other countries. They have gotten all there issues taken care of, but we have not. The reason is that some of the officials are power hungry and do things to take care of themselves and not others, but some are not and they want to make this country better. Those are the ones that should stay and not the power hungry ones. They make it fair. So I strongly belive that the Electoral College should stay the same, and that the government should be the one to change. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+257b8323c560,A8B4C79F9954,I have to say I do not agree on this possible policy change. I believe children who have grades below a B average should still be able to participate in school sports and other activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43abe11c8039,A8B4C79F9954,"B' s are considered above average. What about the average people, who really are trying? Can't they still do what they want to do? C' s are considered average ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+20ae7fd62e12,A8B4C79F9954,"I believe that ""average"" people with ""average"" grades should still have the opportunity to play in sports and other activities ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b16567e3da9,A8B4C79F9954,"I can see how you think that sports may lower their grades even more, being too much of a distraction ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+112ce9708b12,A8B4C79F9954,I know that physical activities are something that help the development of your body. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+308eaf77f13d,A8B4C79F9954,Most Children have at least 4 to 5 hours after school to choose what they want to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e038d5feb93,A8B4C79F9954,"Even when these children are done with their homework they have free time and have the choice on what to do, which usually leads to T.V., video games, eating, computer... exedra. I think if these few extra hours lead to sports, it would be okay. If kids take the time and put in the effort to fit in sports and schooling in one schedule, I think that everything would be great ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b4a10893116d,A8B4C79F9954,"School was never easy and sports never made it any easier, but at least these kids will experience something they may have been dreaming of doing for a long time. I propose that children with a C average or above in our school should be able to participate in activities and sports. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3b4b2667b86a,A8B5DBFB7936,I beleive that we should keep the electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+465a36e64c89,A8B5DBFB7936,I say that because it would be choas if we did not have them keeping the voting in check. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3a3117815d2a,A8B5DBFB7936,"I have one reason why we should keep the electoral college. And that is to make and keep the right/ best person for president to we can feel safe and good about the newly elected president. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a63fe2daff8d,A8B5DBFB7936,I can see where you think that the electoral college doesnt really do anything. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+79bbd94ee4ad,A8B5DBFB7936,But thats were you would be wrong. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b65a9e74d85a,A8B5DBFB7936,"I say that because without them there could be a horrible president that just made ppresident because he was good at advertising and he is paying off companys to advertise to make him look better. But i can see what your getting at because he did win fair and square but that doesnt mean that he will turn out to be a good president. That were the electoral college will come in, by chosing the true person who will be there for our country when we need him the most. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+84afb5f74717,A8B5DBFB7936,And its not like the people are not choosing their president. The electoral college still go's with the peoples vote they just go in more depth with choosing the right president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac62f2450d56,A8B5DBFB7936,So in the end everyone wins. the people will have the best leader of the united states they can have thanks to the electoral college. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09520352e8a0,A8E73414941A,"Everyone has their own opinion about everything, for some people they think that some things that they imagine to be a bad idea, might be very good for economy, or for other issues, some other things that you think is a good idea, might be really bad for the environment, but thats just your opinion, and its okay. There are many thoughts about this subject, which is about the Electoral College. The Electoral College in some cases is a good idea, and in some cases, to some people, its a bad idea. If you do not know what the Electoral College is or means, it is a process consisting of a ceratin selection of electors that vote for President and Vice President in the election, by counting electoral votes by Congress. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+575014209fa4,A8E73414941A,Im here to tell you all the information you need to see what your opinion of this topic is ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+816e868b2be5,A8E73414941A,"As most of you know, the presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday afer the first Monday in November. This is when there are two candidates running to be President of the United States ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01b40884d980,A8E73414941A,"You would think it would just be you, the people, but theres actually other people that vote too, called the Electoral college. You help choose your states electors when you vote for your President ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19a5de8cda82,A8E73414941A,the reason why this happens is because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates electors. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e442256f96a2,A8E73414941A,"Under the Electoral College system, voters vote for the state of electors and not for the president. The state of electors elect the president. The electors are bacically anyone not holding public office. The people who pick who it is, can be chosen from variaties of places. It could be the presidential candidates themselves, or it could be the states party central commitee, or it could be the state conventions. Each state only casts one vote ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a5ba8220d57,A8E73414941A,"The Electoral College is unfair to voters becuase of the winner take all system, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fda96d16b021,A8E73414941A,Candidates dont spend much time in states they have no chance of winning in. This pretty much proves that the Electoral College is very cruel and unfair. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+909ffee9891a,A8E73414941A,The Electoral College has a very wide range. it spreads all through USA and each state has a different number of electoral Votes. Each party selects a bunch of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afac40af031c,A8E73414941A,The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ecc9dfd296cb,A8E73414941A,"no other region has enough Electoral votes to elect a President. The votes can be very close to the same number of both candidates, and thats a tough situation ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4203a4da1d8e,A8E73414941A,"Voters in presidental elections are people who enjoy expressing their opinion on political news, rather than people who dont give a say in the elections. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5d6635147122,A8F2D9005A0A,"After much research, I have decided that the electoral college should not be kept. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7eb5025d57c5,A8F2D9005A0A,"It is not completley fair, because the citizens think they're voting for their prefered candidate when really, they're voting for that candidate's electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7db9bb548849,A8F2D9005A0A,"That means that if a candidate wins the votes of the citizens, he might not win the electoral college votes. This also means that he was not the president that the U.S. citizens wanted, but what the electoral voters wanted. In the article ""The Indefensible Electoral College"" they ask the question, ""Can voters sometimes controll whom their electors vote for?"" and they answer, ""Not always."" This proves that the electoral college is not fair. Also, the electoral college shouldn't be kept because some electors will, ""refuse to vote for their party's candidate and cast a vote for whomever they please,"" says ""The Indifensible Electoral College"". 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2dfc159cd554,A8F2D9005A0A,"""Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" says ""The Indefensible Electoral College."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+972a7e9641f3,A8F2D9005A0A,"That is more than half of the United States population, therefore we should get rid of it. I believe that we should abolish it along with that 60 percent, thatway when voting, it will be much more fair. Also, it will make choosing the president of the U.S. up to the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aab9179ffb05,A8F2D9005A0A,"Some may think that keeping the electoral college is good because, If there is a tie in the election, the electoral college can break it with their votes. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+043e478581e8,A8F2D9005A0A,"Although this does help, it has only happened once, therefore proving to not be needed. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ff96a7582c43,A8F2D9005A0A,"Other reasons are because it gives certainty of an outcome, helps big states, and avoids run-off elections, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+630d9b545718,A8F2D9005A0A,but are also not that important. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a70437139ec9,A8F2D9005A0A,"In conclusion I, along with 60 percent of the U.S. populaton, believe that the electoral college should not be kept due to its unfairness. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03cd41c91634,A9105216AAA3,I believe that driverless cars should be developed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+33ce08e53bf5,A9105216AAA3,the many positive capabilities of the cars ,Claim,Effective,,,
+66a96b0724b9,A9105216AAA3,", advanced technology that is currently available and constantly being improved, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+30d825d4f4fb,A9105216AAA3,the safety features added by the driverless car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f416388a2b56,A9105216AAA3,One major consideration for the development of the driverless car is the environmental benefits ,Claim,Effective,,,
+94ac3520ccd5,A9105216AAA3,"The Google cofounder Sergey Brin says that the cars ""would use half the fuel of toay's taxis."" There is a large fear of increasing gas prices and lack of natural resources in the world today. The production of driverless cars would quell those fears as they are much more fuel efficient than the cars used today. Brin also states that the cars would ""offer far more flexibility than a bus."" This is crucial as the bus usually has a route that it must adhere to while the driverless car can go straight to the desired location. This aspect also positively impacts the environment. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+90f1174a62a6,A9105216AAA3,"Similarly, the advanced technology that is already being created also helps with the development of the driverless car. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fa3f9a5552b3,A9105216AAA3,"Beginning from the late 1950s, the concept of the driverless car was already thought of. Now, the concept is beginning to come to fruition due to the advanced technology created. The most important bit of technology on the driverless car is the spinning sensor on the roof, also known as the LIDAR. The LIDAR is able ""to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings."" Without the LIDAR, the accuracy of the driverless car would be greatly reduced as the car would have no sense of its surroundings. Another technology that was greatly enhanced is the antilock brakes. In the 1980s, the antilock brakes ""used speed sensors at the wheels"" to monitor when the car was becoming out of control. Back then, the antilock brakes only had a sensor to monitor the wheel's speed. Now, the antilock brakes have become more advanced to the point that they are able to ""detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers."" The antilock brakes have evolved from only having a sensor that monitors speed to sensors that can detect many dangerous conditions. The advancement of car technology greatly affects how safe and successful a driverless car may be. A driverless car would most likely not be able to work in the 1980s with the speed sensor as the antilock brakes. Now, the driverless car would be able to work very effectively as it combines a plethora of sensors and cameras to ensure safety. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+742393015dce,A9105216AAA3,"Speaking of safety, the driverless cars all have a safety feature that guarantees almost the maximum safety potential. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+95dc02dc7c63,A9105216AAA3,"The reliance of a driver within the driverless car finalizes the development of the driverless car. If the car encounters a foreign situation, the driver will just be notified and will take over from there. This concept of passing over the responsibility of driving makes the driverless car very safe. As long as there is an alert driver within the car, the car is almost certainly not going to make any accidents. Car developers designed the driverless car to ""steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills."" Thus, the car will do most of the driving and when there is a difficult situation, the human driver will take over. This ensure the utmost safety of the driver and the passengers as there is an extremely low risk of an accident occuring. There are ""driver's seats that vibrate"" and the Google car even ""announces when the driver should be prepared to take over."" This increases the safety of the driverless car as the driver will be notified when to take over. Therefore, the driver will also know the situation and will be ready to handle any troubles the driverless car couldn't handle. The safety features positively affect the development of the driverless car. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3926ecba13d1,A9105216AAA3,"All in all, the cutbacks on the usage of natural resources, the advanced technology used to increase the safety of the driver, and the many built in safety features advocate for the production of the driverless car.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ccbcfa7f369c,A91A08E523D5,"As you know the Electoral College is a process, not a place. But do you think many other people know that. They might get a hint ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1633ac641eef,A91A08E523D5,if you can change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dbb34ea0cadd,A91A08E523D5,In my opinion that would make me happier if the person I voted for came on tv everyday telling me new things. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b753bea62bfc,A91A08E523D5,"I wouldn't want someone I had no say in do that. because the person you voted for you obvioulsy had a reason to vote for them, in my persepctive of this, other people will catch on and find the good in the best one. The guy with the most votes wins. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+448838e6d295,A91A08E523D5,"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, ""the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of electoral votes by congress"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27cae10760b4,A91A08E523D5,"With that said, me being at the age of fourteen, I won't get the chance to go with the electors and vote for who I want, but being able to have the popular vote selected, I feel in a way as if im a huge part in the voting thats being held. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87c9ce88d387,A91A08E523D5,Therefore having the Electoral College consist of 538 electors. I still woudl feel a part of the voting ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76ce19f85ada,A91A08E523D5,"Each canidate running for president in your state has his or her own froup of electors. These elcetors are ususually chosen by the canidates political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilites are. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6822ca084d8,A91A08E523D5,I feel as if popoular votes will benefit the region in many ways. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74f278d385be,A91A08E523D5,"But starting on the residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised- to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their intrests, that he really insnt their president. If I wee presidnet i would want everyone to feel welcome and wanting to listen to what I have to say. Not saying that they would all like my decisons but I would want them invloved, I beileve every president should want their citizens involved and do be able to stay up to date. Statistics show that it has been argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a canidate who has no hope of carrying their state. "" The founding fathers esatblished it in the Constitution aas a comprimise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93fa7c97841f,A91A08E523D5,"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Aboloshing the electoral college.  A toll taken in 2000 shortly after Al Gore, the popular vote had overcome the electoral vote. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose presidency. So if everyone make san effort to get involved and do their part, they can have the president they want. If they don't do their paert they shouldn't have a say in it. Thank you for your time. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+01331d1f36ca,A924B3431D21,I think that we should actually keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b0d3bdabf43,A924B3431D21,electors choose the president and the vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+76c87231566c,A924B3431D21,Another reason we should keep the electoral  college is because it has 538 electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9402a93b08c6,A924B3431D21,It also helps the U.S by giving us a president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+52c83528afc0,A924B3431D21,The reason I say this is because we the people need a president and the electoral college helps us get one. The electoral college helps us get a vice president as well because if the president dies or some sort the vice president can take in. The electoral college also helps count the electoral votes by the congress. Those are some ways the electoral college helps us. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+864bf620612e,A924B3431D21,The reason I say this is because every elector do there job by picking the president that will run for the U.S.It also helps pick out the vice president as well like I said in my first paragraph. That is why we should keep the electoral college. The electors help pick out the president that we need for everyone. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1ed9859735c,A924B3431D21,A president can do so much for us like Barack Obama. He did great things to keep this nation secure for the people. Other great president did the same thing back then. Because of the electors from the electoral college. Those electors helped pick a president so we can have one and that is why we need the electoral college. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+361aac34d6b2,A924B3431D21,"In Conclusion,so today I talked about why we the people need an electoral college and there are many reasons for it. To sum it all up the reasons we need an electoral college is becasue the electors helps us by picking a president,vice president,and the electoral votes that we need. Another is because we have 538 electors that help pick a president. Last is that they give the U.S a president. So this are some of the reasons why we the people need an electoral college.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0410e8a9c35c,A93FA7E8FB81,"I believe that the electoral college should be changed and be ended oncce and for all. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+662a5aec982f,A93FA7E8FB81,I think that the electoral college is a certain way of cheating in a presidency that you dont want to win. When people in the states vote for a new president they're giving all of they're votes to the electors ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01e30741c2c2,A93FA7E8FB81,This is one of the biggest reasons I think its not fair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4b9d2b9aa81,A93FA7E8FB81,They're trusting the elecotrs with all of they're votes when they dont even know who the electors will vote for. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+314b03d55675,A93FA7E8FB81,Almost nobody in the states even know's who the electors are. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80c07cdbe4f3,A93FA7E8FB81,"Why should everyone be putting they're trust with votes into people they dont know? Even when I read the passage I saw that the electors could possibly get confused and vote the wrong way and if many of them end up doing that you can ultimately end up with the wrong president. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a91a9317bcac,A93FA7E8FB81,Another big flaw that the electoral college consists of is what if it does end up getting a tie ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+17d58cff1cd3,A93FA7E8FB81,"then we would have to pass it all onto the House of Represenatives. If the house of rep, end up picking the wrong president, it could be even worse. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+871c531151a8,A93FA7E8FB81,"I'm personally not into politics but I can already tell that if I was I would hate the electoral college, I dont even understand how you couldn't. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc069c329655,A93FA7E8FB81,"The electoral college I feel is something that first started out helping the elections for when it was first created but has changed massively over time, and it hasn't changed in a good way at all. It's almost as if our own american citizens can pick they're president. We have to leave that all up to our electors, which I dont this is FAIR at all to all our voters. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a5bc362efe2,A93FA7E8FB81,"If it wasn't for our electoral college, we would've never had George W. Bush as are president. He didn't even get the most votes! but since our electoral college can vote for whoever he ended up winning anyways. I think this topic is obviously a one sided question cause there's obviously a right answer here. Abolish the electoral college! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2dd36570b267,A95B8B50E0C1,I think policy one is much better ,Position,Adequate,,,
+adbbbab75875,A95B8B50E0C1,because sometimes there are days where you forget something or don't remember to bring something. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f647025bfc1,A95B8B50E0C1,If you had a cell phone then you could call or text your parents/guardians and ask them to bring it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6d1ced338179,A95B8B50E0C1,Also if you have your cell phone on you instead of taking notes in class some cell phones have a camera and the ones with cameras could take a picture of their notes. If you need to find out what a word means you can just look it up on your phone. If you turn them off when they are supposed to be turned off then there are no problems. Also some people forget to bring lets say there gym clothes they could just call or text there parents and they could bring them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+379b6cf4c218,A95B8B50E0C1,I see why people wouldn't want cell phones at school like they could be distractions ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bfa32ea8aa46,A95B8B50E0C1,"but, if they are allowed at schools then students should have no reason to do it in class when they know they can do it at a free time in the day. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+27556854d5cf,A95B8B50E0C1,there are plenty of reasons why kids should be able to use cell phones in school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+deb76dbc9b3f,A95B8B50E0C1,"One big reason we should have cell phones in school is they could be used for all kinds of things like say i am in social studies class and the teacher asks a question and nobody knows the answer then kids could get on there phones and look up the answer. Another reason would be that students rarely study, much less every night but, if they are allowed to use there cell phones then that makes studying easier and more fun. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5290dd9a108d,A9694C187893,"Dear state senator, I am against the decison to keep the
+
+Electoral College ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4e0d83aa2a37,A9694C187893,"one reason because the candidate running for President isnt being voted for their electors are. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ea3f24318c5a,A9694C187893,"then in the passage I learned the electors then elect the President , as I was reading i saw a few name s mentioned in favor of , as it was stated Abolishing the electoral college ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a96bc38474d5,A9694C187893,"As I read i saw why some might say keep the Electoral College , ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+51d41975800d,A9694C187893,"Al Gore ran for President and won by popular vote thanks to the electoral college , maybe becasue its a by luck situation because it was two parts you had to win as President , they may dont see it as a fault on Electoral College part because it did say he won by popular vote thanks to the electoral college. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c64500f2372,A9694C187893,"Bob Dole agree with the choice of abollishing the Electoral College , some says its unfair outdated , and irrational . The decison to keep the Electoral College should is a win or lose situation because as i read i didnt see a lot of proof of people being for the decison on keeping the Electoral College to make the right decison they sh     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9968e045f4f9,A98E8EFFC8A9,"Driverless cars have always been a big idea for the future. However, there are some really important pros and cons for driverless cars. Driverless cars can be very dangerous to not only the individual driving, but also to everyone around. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+956fc47887e1,A98E8EFFC8A9,Perhaps driverless cars isn't such a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f6b2d34d9c01,A98E8EFFC8A9,the technology failing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1cd01f733166,A98E8EFFC8A9,the safety of everyone around it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6fe8d69cb9b,A98E8EFFC8A9,Safety is the MAIN key to a driverless car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9bae87c2aad,A98E8EFFC8A9,"Since a driverless car would be driverless, not only the driver would need to be alert but everyone around it would need to be, which is common sense for any type of vehicle or transportation. Considering the fact that the human being is always in charge of an accident with a regular car. That woudn't be the case for a ""driverless car"". Now even though the driverless car have sensors and other types of monitoring to prevent accidents and disfunctions, who's to say the driver isn't paying attention when they need to be and something goes wrong. In paragraph 9 it talks about how traffic laws are wriiten to assume that the human is in control at all times. That's completely understandable, if the human doesn't do what he needs to do to make sure his manufacturer is working correctly, it would be his fault for not taking care of it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5478a9e80a6,A98E8EFFC8A9,"For everyone else around a driverless car, would always be in great danger. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23e2366195fc,A98E8EFFC8A9,"No matter how well the car itself is functioning, you dont know if everyone else is paying attention to their own vehicle. Pedestrians around the driverless cars have no control over what it does. If something happens to a pedestrian, who's responsibility is that? If a sensor on the car isn't working properly, which it should be, there would be more deaths and injuries to people around the vehicle and to the person inside of the vehicle. The minor issues of a driverless vehicle could cause a huge problem. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7a2a916f7846,A98E8EFFC8A9,the manufacturing could disfunction in the middle of driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f97eeac75865,A98E8EFFC8A9,"Now someone that would condone a driverless car would say, ""You would need to make sure everything is properly working before taking it out on the road."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a137fcbe2e9f,A98E8EFFC8A9,"That's actually not all you would need to do. Not only do you need to make sure everything is working properly, you would need to make sure what ever is functioning the car is functioning correctly at all times. One of the biggest concerns could be a driver might not know what could be wrong with a car and if something is wrong with the system, he wouldnt know and the car would just break down or stop working. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+82c98c5d8707,A98E8EFFC8A9,"Driverless cars could seem like a good idea sometimes when your lazy becuase you don't have to worry about actually driving the vehicle yourslef. Of course people are going to find a driverless car fascinating, but the most important thing you would want to worry about is safety and having the best functioning technology. Technology can always fail, so no matter how well it may seem to be working, anything could happen at anytime. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f1684f21433a,AA0FF7AA95C3,"I have a very strongly worded, persuavive letter written for you today of why our united nation, must abolish the electoral college. I am aware that the electoral college is one of the main ways president's become elected, but it's serving an unjustice to our nations people. You must do something of the crisis that our country is facing with the Electoral College. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6dbb6c046b34,AA0FF7AA95C3,I have two compelling reasons of why the electoral college should be abolished. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6cb0a585f881,AA0FF7AA95C3,"My first reason of why we should abolish the electoral college is because of the method it is done in.  What I mean by this is, according to Source 1:What is the Electoral College?, it says, ""Most states have a
+
+""winner- take all"" system that awards electors to the winning presidential canididate."" The winner- take all system is not a fair way to elect a president becuase of its biases. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5930602fd276,AA0FF7AA95C3,"The candidates running for the presidency only visit the largly populated states in order to get their electoral points, for instance, most candidates go to Californa or Texas becuase those are the states that have for electoral points. But, by doing this all the smaller states that have less electoral points are never visited by the candidates, the voters then may have never seen an ad or campiagn for a certain candidates . According to Source 2: ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong"", by Bradford Plummer, it states, ""During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and votes in 25 of the media markets didn't get to see a single campiagn ad"". On the contrary, it is stated by Source 3: In defense of the Electoral College, it states,"" No reigon has enough electoral votes to elect a president."" This is true, but candiadtes focus on larger states that will supply them with more electoral votes, and don't even visit or pay any attention the smaller states. I strongly negate the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ea26ec4c482,AA0FF7AA95C3,"My second reason of why our country must abolish the Electoral College is becuase it is a ""disaster factor"", as stated by Source 2 ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+33a60f31e4b2,AA0FF7AA95C3,"I agree with this for two reasons. First, becuase it does allow the people to vote for the president or canididate they prefer. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but slate of electors, who turn elect the president, as stated by ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best- laid defenses of the system are wrong"". I strongly agree with that except from the article I have stated. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ca1ec31492a5,AA0FF7AA95C3,"Another reason, why the Electoral college is a disaster factor is becuase most of the United States citizens prefer a direct election to the kind we have now, Electoral College. More presiciely 60 percent of voters to dont want the electoral college, that's majority of our population! If majority of our nation is against the electoral college why haven't we abolished it? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19c85aa40fae,AA0FF7AA95C3,"In conculsion, ""It's offical: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly aserations without much basis in reality"", according to Source 2.  I would like you to consider all the problems our nation is facing due to the Electoral College. I have stated two contentions of why you should abolish the Electoral College; First,the method of how its done is very bias and unfair and secondly, because the Electoral College is a ""Disaster Factor"" or  causes many disruptions in our country. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+479437ceb528,AA3205AA362D,We should abolish the electoral college. It nakes voting unfair and is dangerous to the American society. It corrupts the soul of all Americans and makes people unhappy. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+683b6a8bbf6a,AA3205AA362D,"If we want our society to live, we should end the electoral college. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+36721b2d7fd3,AA3205AA362D,The electoral college is extremely biased on the canditates and the voters have only a miniscule chance to elect the right voter. The chance is so miniscule that even an atom couldn't fit through it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4fbbfc8612f3,AA3205AA362D,"On the counterclaim that it could be a tie, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c893b4703dae,AA3205AA362D,"which has a higher percentage rate to tie, all of America, or 0.00000001% of the population of America? ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8e127d7ae4bf,AA3205AA362D,"The canditates dont even focus on the states that aren't swing states, such as Wyoming or Alaska. If a president is from California, he/she already has 20% of the vote in his/her pocket. To make things worse, half of the states are not even into the campaign, voting canditates ""they"" think is best, not voting the canditates their state thinks is best. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5aa9c9188e71,AA3205AA362D,"To top it off, people are just so wooed by the canditate's ad, or their wealth, or their eyes, that they don't stop to think what the canditate could do for them. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+727d70e53b81,AA3205AA362D,"Just two years ago, I found myself talking to a women who needed Obamacare for her ill son, yet she was going to vote for Romney. People are just too dazzled by how things may seem, when it's just a huge marketing scam. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+762640417372,AA3205AA362D,A large state gets more attention than a smaller state does... Is that what we really want in our country ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1cb9b64bc93f,AA3205AA362D,"After all these years of black equality and women's rights, we have decided to just completely ruin our entire form of government by being prejuice to other states. Yes, they may have a lesser population, but that doesn't mean anything. It just means that we are not giving people the right of suffrage. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+894a5e35a40a,AA3205AA362D,"Apparently, the electoral college elects a ""clear winner"", when the popular vote coiuld do that just fine on its own ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+21c56a081fd4,AA3205AA362D,"Why do you think we have voting day for? I'm sure its so that the president that they didn't vote for was chosen by the elctoral college. Here's some logic, lets choose a selected number of people to vote for president instead of all of America. Isn't that a great idea. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51ca18f2ae9c,AA3205AA362D,"""Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election...."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a7f1e6e86aed,AA3205AA362D,"Really, is that why people vote? So you are saying that people vote just because they prefer, or like, the person other another candidate. So going back to my earlier point, people are just so amazed at their ""something"", that they just decide to take the effort to vote for them. No, people, that's not why, it's because they think they can make a change in the everyday world. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3a120c8cd3a0,AA3205AA362D,"Ladies and gentlemen, it's all a game of cruel manipulation, Republicans manipulating the government so they get less taxes, Democrats manipulating the government to achieve free healthcare. It's a dangerous game, but the puppeteer who pulls the strings better than the last is the one who always wins.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+894684b88e33,AA3A35044E77,I don't think that you should require every student to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4c683d2663bc,AA3A35044E77,"I think this because everybody should be able to do what they want. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3b51b69674b3,AA3A35044E77,"It would be a good idea to start a little club or something of that sort to do community service.
+
+Or you could put up a list in the office or right outside of the office for people to participate in doing community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9978d8b910a9,AA3A35044E77,I don't think everybody should have to do it cause when they are not in school some have things to do like sports and other sorts of clubs. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+47822d92974e,AA3A35044E77,You could also get a class that people could be in to do community service as a class so people could put on job applications and college applications too. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7eca0270e8be,AA3A35044E77,"A class would also be good for tutoring the elementary, so they wouldn't have to stay after school. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4bded60476b1,AA3F8EC40764,"Driverless Cars Are Coming is a short article that depicts the use of computerized cars that are being made. The cars are supposed to be safe and trustworthy. One part of the article describes a public-transport taxi system that would take people from place to place, navigating through other driverless cars. The idea of this self controlling, moving car can be very advantageous to people, using less fuel, prevent or stop car accident, and take people to their destination at ease. However, there are issues with the automated automobile. How will driverless cars adapt with cars with actual drivers? How will everyone acquire the self-driving car when they could cost fortunes? Also who is blamed if and when prevented accidents aren't prevented? Lastly what about car computer hacking? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1321e62b8586,AA3F8EC40764,"The idea of the self driving car is courageous, but it will not work for our society. ",Position,Effective,,,
+2dde1d910e46,AA3F8EC40764,"First, driverless cars can drive at ease when other driverless cars are in uniform with the other cars, but when one car has someone drivng the car then the driverless cars aren't able to predict the outcome the real driver will make. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b4a09c4df341,AA3F8EC40764,"Assuming the driverless cars would communicate with one another, they could all drive together in uniform, predicting eachother's movements thorugh the streets. Then one car, in a situation in which is being driven by someone, cannot be in communication with the driverless cars and the driverless car tries to predict one's movement. The driver actually goes the opposite way predicted, crashing into the other car. This is not something that can easily be avoided without other people owning the driverless car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00da37c71b96,AA3F8EC40764,"Driverless cars are very mechanical, probably costing much more than one's average car price. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+109b91bed56e,AA3F8EC40764,"Then everyone is told to adapt to the change and buy this self-propelling car, but they are much too costly. Without the car, people could get into accidents with the driverless car. No complete safety would be acquired until every single car within the set area is a driverless car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5d9514820a44,AA3F8EC40764,"If an area with all driverless cars is made, what happens when the self driving cars do finally mess up and crash into another driverless car? Who should be blamed? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+85a771633639,AA3F8EC40764,"The creators of the car? The person inside the vehicle that should have taken over and tried to drive for themselves, assuming they even know how to drive with little to no practice? One could also easily hack into the cars computer also. Computer hacking is already a very regular thing in the United States, so what stops people from hacking into cars and purposefully causing accidents? These types of issues that are very hard to deal with could not be easily dealt with.
+
+Blame for driverless cars could be impossible in some cases. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c1519343538a,AA3F8EC40764,"the idea of driverless cars cannot be comepletely viable for safety of passengers and safety of citizens on the side of the street. There is no way driverless cars could be able to completely predict a real drivers movements. The cars could be hard for everyone to buy and adapt to. Last, you cannot find true blame for a driverless cars action when there is not anyone to blame. The driverless cars will not work in a society that is not ready for it. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e934fb867a8d,AA42E3966A3C,I think students should that policy 1 because they can bring there phone to school and just use doing there free or when they let them use it . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+610227834f9d,AA42E3966A3C,And its very inportan to have a phone at school just in case something happiness to you or when your on the bus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e833cdc7b659,AA42E3966A3C,you never know what could happen . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce1110060d5c,AA42E3966A3C,And when students have phones out they should give them a warning to put it away not just take it way and make them pay $10 and bring there parents that's just rude to do to someone give them a chances . when they give them a warning they should just write there name down and the next time they do cheek if there name has been writhen down and if yes then they may take it way but if not don't take it away . And just in case it fails just let then pick it up and tell then to stick it back in the locker and if they dont wont then hold it for them until the end of the day and give it back to them . okay well if your in class teaching and the phone ring then you may take it way cause it should be off it only if its free time or if let you . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8634b2683f92,AA4620DAA6CF,I PROPER_NAME think that the electoral college should be Abolished . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4b34f62c6327,AA4620DAA6CF,How would you feel if you were running for President and only 1 party got to pick the winner ? That just seems unfair and Unorganized to me ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f6a1da58200d,AA4620DAA6CF,"For someone to have to go through an entie process just to pick President , is way more far then what it could be ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5dbc43e2662,AA4620DAA6CF,"I dont thnk its okay for State Legislatures to have a say-so in who should be President should be because for them to try to pick it for themself with out the help of ""The People"" which is who really matters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3a02b6c8f30,AA4620DAA6CF,"The People"" should have just as much an say-so in who the President and Vise president should be .Well they do but i dont think the State Partie should have anything to do with the votes. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2144f5386090,AA4620DAA6CF,"For 1 the collage or process its' self is Unnessary jst for someone to cast a vote , when they could really check who they want to vote for on a peice of paper or something ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa36dc289d42,AA4620DAA6CF,Sure that would take alot of time just to count ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+de28af63f371,AA4620DAA6CF,i think thats far more organized than for everyone to go through a process on a computer or something ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ca7538c805aa,AA4620DAA6CF,According to the text the Electral College process consists of the selection of the electors .... ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27decb9c3649,AA4620DAA6CF,Thats too much voting going on for no reason ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d0a08f161c1,AA4620DAA6CF,"Everyone is entilted to their own opinion and it should be heard , because every little vote counts. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d296ab47d0c0,AA4620DAA6CF,I remember when i was in Elementary school nd when election time came around they took the students in the library to vote , even though we were not old enough to vote i can garentee the votes that we casted made a difference even if it was just by 1 vote . ,Evidence,Adequate,,
+50be1d88a927,AA4620DAA6CF,"But as i think abut it , the president is not just for the benifit of the Congress and the State Legslatures , He/She is for the benifit of EVERYONE . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0861dab4fbf,AA4620DAA6CF,i think that the State Parties wants to have a say-so in the votes just so they can feel important . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f32776de07d4,AA6AAA8F8407,the electoral collage is a process that helps use vote for the preaident and vice president. and they count the electores votes and it is desited by congress. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+40cde09ae800,AA6AAA8F8407,and most states have a winner takes all system. sorce federal register most people dont like the electoral collage process most people prefer the derect election insted. and over 60 percent prefer it. and according to a gallup pull in 2000 taken shortly after algore thanks to the electoral collage he won the popular vote but lost the presidensy. sorce federal register a argumant over the outcome of the electoral collage vote has happend in the past. there was one in 2000 but thay dont think it will happen eny time soon. and the only reson the electoral collage votes exseeds is becase of the popular votes. for exampal in 2012 obam receved 61.7 percant of the electoral votes when he only had 51.3 of the populare votes because they based it on a winner takes all vote. sorce federal register the electoral collage vote hast to have a presidential canidet that hast to have no trans-regional appeal. because the canident with only regonal appeals is unlikely to be a sucssesful prasident. and the residents of the other regions are more likly to feel that there votes dont count. sorce federal register the electoral vote helps balens out the biger states votes. like in florida when obama won with 29 electoral votes. but its proven that a biger state gets more atention than a smaller state because it gets more attention from presidential canidets dering campaning. sorce federal register. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fda32ef1b335,AA6AAA8F8407,the electoral vote avoids problems in some cases were a canidet dosent get a mager vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41896473c5da,AA6AAA8F8407,"and the reson they have the electoral vote is so wiel the elections are going on a canodet dusent drop out. and thay do this so thay can have a clear winner. sorce fedral register. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+137a9cc5ee21,AA6AAA8F8407,the elector collage vote is regarded as a non-democratic methido selecting a president. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8435bf71db46,AA6AAA8F8407,and when you are voting for a presidentioal canodent you are actoly voting for a slate of electors. and it is posible that the winner of the elector vote will not win the populer vote. sorce richared a. posner.    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+813afa01da90,AAA72CBAC7F8,"My name is PROPER_NAME and i am an American Citizen. I already know about The Electoral College and its process. I know it has 538 electors and 270 of the electoral votes are needed to elect president. Along with that, I know that our founding fathers developed it in the constitution and their chosen by the candidate's political party. But i do not know why so much people bash The Electoral College when its a good thing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b63b171ad114,AAA72CBAC7F8,"Based on my research, The Electoral College should stay and should be used everytime in an election for President. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+66ffcf786368,AAA72CBAC7F8,"To Start off, most people think of The Electoral College as a non-democratic method of selecting a president based on Source 3: by Richard A. Posner. Its is a non-democratic method because its the electors who elect the president not the people. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4a44f0a8565b,AAA72CBAC7F8,"Based on Richard however, ""each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed"". Its possible to win the electoral vote but not the national popular vote. It happened in 2000, with Gore when he was running. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d3173cdfe315,AAA72CBAC7F8,"But that was the first time since 1888. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a55ef5950f46,AAA72CBAC7F8,"There are some flaws of The Electoral College however. According to Source 2: written by Bradford Plumer, voters vote for electors who elect the President not the people. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f2b47b9a6b4b,AAA72CBAC7F8,"No one really knows the elctors and they cant be seen holding public office. It depends on the state to pick the electors and voters cannot always control whom their electors vote for. In addition, as Bradford said ""voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidates"". These disadvantages may want to make people disapprove of The Electoral College disregarding its advantages. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e268bfca3685,AAA72CBAC7F8,"There are five really good reasons for keeping the Electoral College. Based on Source 3 the first is ""certainty of outcome"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c83a69c98c0,AAA72CBAC7F8,This basically means if the winning candidate's share of the Electoral votes is high most likely his popular votes will be too. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+956954844aee,AAA72CBAC7F8,The next reason is that its everyone's president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+245e2628cd12,AAA72CBAC7F8,Like Romney he only focused on benefiting the one region and the Electoral College had no favor in that and as a result he got no gains from them. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b0d9cef89565,AAA72CBAC7F8,"The third reason is ""swing state"" like Richard calls it. The ""toss up states"" are the ones who really decide the election. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e30fe85d583,AAA72CBAC7F8,Voters in those states pay more attention to the campaign since they are the ones who will decide the outcome. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+222a84397e2e,AAA72CBAC7F8,The last two reasons are the big states and avoiding run-off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72c160230826,AAA72CBAC7F8,A large state gets more attention from Presidential candidates in a campaign then a small state does. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+71bb07eae9d4,AAA72CBAC7F8,The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candiates receives a majority of the votes cast. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6be855cbe9ca,AAA72CBAC7F8,These five reasons make the electoral College what it is now. Most voters dont watch the Presidential campaign's and chose whoever. The Electoral College is fulled with educated people who actually take the time and watch and study the campaign's so their vote is the vote that makes a difference. Despite the Electoral College's lack of democratic pedigree its still should stay.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8a53b05c7ce7,AAA9670F8168,This letter is concerning your considerations of implementing the policy of requiring school sports players to maintain a B average (3.0 GPA) in order to play their respective sport. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+346b77856bff,AAA9670F8168,"For some students, this policy is outrageous and should be thrown out of consideration, for others such as myself, we believe that it is fully justified and would help drive students to achieve higher grades so that they may continue to participate in their sport. ",Position,Effective,,,
+97047390637b,AAA9670F8168,"To allow students to perform poorly and still play sports in the school is, in my opinion, rewarding unacceptable work. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9eb6c4d504fb,AAA9670F8168,"Education should always come before sports, and if one can get by with C's or D's and continue to participate in Football or whatever else pleases them, then they won't be driven to complete their work with an effort, because they don't need to achieve in academics to achieve in their sport. Education is number one, then comes Football, or Soccer, or Baseball, or Track, and the leniency with academic performance doesn't support that basic fact. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4ca26b695bde,AAA9670F8168,"If a B average is the minimum for participation, then it may inspire students (who would otherwise just float by) to do their work, do it well, and bring home a nice progress report every few weeks. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+da6d0af3ecd4,AAA9670F8168,"Isn't the goal of every school to inspire their students and bring them to a successful life? If the minimum became a 3.0 GPA, then students would strive to become better in school so that they may play their favorite sport(s). It would be a win/win situation: fantastic grades and a wonderful experience in their after-school sport. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f7391e3706a8,AAA9670F8168,"I hope that you take this letter into your consideration, and I hope you decide well on this policy. Some may disagree, some may downright despise the policy, but in the end, it does everyone a favor, and that's hard to argue with from a logical standpoint. In the end, it's the simple fact that education comes before all else, because it's more likely that one would become a doctor, a lawyer, or an engineer than a professional sports player, and allowing the minimum work to pass won't help the student later on in life. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b3a713bd4ec6,AABDFA8D20B1,More companies are pouring in more and more money trying to make the perfect driveless cars but pursuing the driveless car is a negative thing for car manufacturing should not be pursued. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+da66bec89aa3,AABDFA8D20B1,Developing driveless cars could make driving easier but is a neagtive thing ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c910acf4fb45,AABDFA8D20B1,there is a big safety concern ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5587f5efa21f,AABDFA8D20B1,it can make driving boring ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4dc6b21c210d,AABDFA8D20B1,it still requires the assitance of the driver. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b7f3262f539d,AABDFA8D20B1,Driveless cars have huge and complicated safety risk. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+65fe62661e25,AABDFA8D20B1,"Driveless cars are not perfectly save and can cause major problems when driving in places with construction or complicated traffics or complicated driving routes and if the driver does not take control of the car, the driver and the passengers in the cars and other people can get seriously injured. Driveless cars are so doubted for their safety that certain states have limited the use or banned them from being driven or tested in their state roads, a few states who have done this is Calforina, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia. Driveless cars who notify people when to take over if the emergency are still not that safe as they have no effective to notify the driver that he should take over, many companies have tried different techniques but none of them have found an effective way to get the drivers attention in case the drivers needs to take over because the car cant handle the roads or sencario it is in. Without an effective way to get the drivers attention, to take over if the time is needed, the car can have an major accident because the driver attention was caught to take over the car and the car couldn't handle the situation, leading to an accident. Even with accidents the problems do not end their, many people and car manducatures and companies do not know if you blame the driver or the manfucaturing. With this not settled out, you getting in an accident because techonolgy an compnay has put in a car was incapable of handling safe driving could make you be blamed for the accident and making you pay alot of money to fix your car and damages while the company who put this faulty techonolgy in the car, walk away with no problems. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+13a1fcab1602,AABDFA8D20B1,Driveless cars are dangerous and can be hazardous to the driver and the people around the driver and also leave you to deal with the consequences of an accident. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7a6a053ffd4,AABDFA8D20B1,"Driveless may seem cool at first, being able to drive all by thereself and not needing the help of any real person but what does that do to the driver. With driveless cars it makes driving cars for the driver boring. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+862ca510bacd,AABDFA8D20B1,Driving without driveless cars was a joy and something people love to do but with driveless cars it ruins the experinece as you do not get to control the car anymore and just have to watch it drive itself. This has been a big problem for car companies as they have to get people to buy their car and enjoy the ride and the car and companies do not know how to do that. Werner Huber who is the BMW project manger said that with cars being able to drive by themselves they have to find new ways to attract and make the costumers enjoy the car and they can not find a way to do that without putting the driver adn the passengers at risk. The only things they have founded to make the car enjoyable to drive with driveless cars is entrainment systems or texting but all these may be enjoyable to the driver but also puts the driver at risk. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+a72e512ae12c,AABDFA8D20B1,"Driveless cars are cars that are suppose to be able to drive by themselves with nobodies assitance but that is not true. These so called driveless cars are not driveless car but are cars that can do basic functions of driving but when anything hard pops up, the driver has to drive the driveless car. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6d204f14208c,AABDFA8D20B1,"This is a real problem becasue having a driveless car should mean that the car should be able to drive without the help of the driver but they can not and make the driver just sit there in the driver seat, staring out the window waiting and getting bored, so they can drive the driveless car when it is in a hard driving condition and if they do not do that they are in risk of a harazardous accident. One of the most technonlgical advances car made by BMW, is a driveless car and is suppose to be driveless car but is it really, the car can only handles speeds up to 25 miles per hour and any faster and the driver has to take over and even when the car is driving itself the driver needs to keep his or her hands on the steering wheel. These self proclaimed driveless cars may look like driveless car but they are not, they require as much assiatant from a real person as non-driveless cars do. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f06ada902dde,AABDFA8D20B1,"Companies all over the world are spending money to make the best driveless car out there but is it really worth it. Driveless cars are not a positive aspect to the automotive industry but is a negative aspect of the industry. These so called driveless cars need the assistance of real life human drivers as much or even sometimes more then regular non-driveless cars, these driveless car also are extremely boring to drive and ride for the driver adn companies can't find a way to fix it, and last but not least these driveless cars are hazardous. These cars can cause accidents, can not deal with hard driving, and can leave you with the consequnces of a horrible accident. Driveless cars might sound amazing and awesome part of the future but it is an negative aspect of the automotive industry and letting that negative aspect get s foothold in the future will be disatorous. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3965eb2e5b6e,AAFC3D84F9A1,"Electoral College? Are you serious? Why is the election set up like this? I though it was a free country. But no. You guys practically vote on your own. You just make it look like you guys care, taking advice from the people in the states, but it's really just your decision. I want to choose freely, not think I am choosing freely. The President is a person who takes action in the country and we the people, want to choose the right one. You guys even show it sometimes. In the state, we might have a majority pick for one president, but you end up picking another one instead. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0fa8839611ba,AAFC3D84F9A1,"I understand that the Electoral College represents us by the number of people in the state, but there's one problem, you're not representing us well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c462cded36a,AAFC3D84F9A1,I think that the United States shouldn't have the Electoral College and should just have a president win by the most votes. This is truly the best way to choose a president. I seriously don't like the idea about Electoral College and I think that the U.S should change that. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+52be9d1a522e,AAFC3D84F9A1,"many people out there, in the U.S, feel the same way as I about the Electoral College. Many of us feel like we are worthless, like we don't matter ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+00778ffe9c74,AAFC3D84F9A1,"If we can't choose our own president to make decisions, how can we trust this country and stay happy, people may leave, have protests, very bad things can happen. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0cf5d0b36bc,AAFC3D84F9A1,it isn't the best way to do it. I just want you to think of the lie you don't want to tell but you are telling. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b8a5a7b1f8d3,AB127AC65E33,I think students should not perform community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d115eeb22a9b,AB127AC65E33,it would seem like they were getting punished for something they didn't do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf86d92233ae,AB127AC65E33,Doing community service would take too much time from doing school work students rely need. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5030480f468b,AB127AC65E33,If students decide to clean up the community then they should be able to do it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ae2de5a19584,AB127AC65E33,If a student were to do something to brake the rules then they should be sentenced community service as a punishment depending on there crime. for example if a student were to start a fight the student should do a number amount of hours doing community servis. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d940707a288b,AB127AC65E33,The students that chose to clean their community should be provided the tools to do the job because they don't have to do anything and some kids cant afford to do so. for example if a student needs a tool the city should provide it ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+747d43804b7f,AB127AC65E33,I think if the student wont to do it then they should do it and get offered to get paid for it because nobody would wont to give up their free time for free. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b8511e0e4be3,AB1C30F7B3FA,"Imagine a point in time in the future where there could be driverless and flying cars. People have always for a long time thought that this could maybe never be possible. Google cofounder Sergey Brin begs to differ. He believes that their may be a start towards driverless cars.
+
+Sergey Brin imagines a future where numerous amounts of driverless car could form a public-transport taxi system. He believes that this could one day become a reality. Driverless car production should still continue over the next several years. Although driverless cars have drove over 500 miles without crashing, there are still setbacks. Driverless car would still have to alert the driver while backing out of driveways and navigating themselves through road issues such at construction zones and accidents with other drivers. Driverless car so far can drive, turn, and brake, but there are still somethings that the driver would still have to do.
+
+Although the production of driverless cars is still just underway, there is still much more to be done. In the future, driverless cars may be available to everyone someday. There is still a long way to go, but we are getting closer to achieving this everyday.       ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b1c086a54622,AB3622039528,"Im writing this letter because I think that keeping the Electoral Collage is unfair to the citizens of the united staes and the candidates running for president. I think that keeping the Electoral Collage is unfair for many reasons. When i read this passage it gave me a claim, to get rid of the Electoral Collage, and it gave me the counter claim, to keep the Electoral Collage. Both the claim and counterclaim gave facts to show what they thought was right, but as i read this passage i thought that ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+1160b4fcf536,AB3622039528,we shouldnt keep the Electoral Collage. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+12e2e9e3f4be,AB3622039528,The main reason i think we should not keep the Electoral Collage is because its unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+641c2c7a03e5,AB3622039528,For example when citizens of the united states go to vote on election day every four years and they vote for who they would do the best job at making choices for our country. Their vote doesnt go to the candidates it goes to the Electoral Collage. I think that is unfair because its atcually them who get to pick the president of the united states not the citizens. That is also unfair for the candiates becuase they spend alot of time and money to get people to vote for them and when the people vote for them it doesnt really count because the Electoral Collage atcually picks who is and is not president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b498ae9a9bc,AB3622039528,I also dont like the winner take all method of voting. When that happens its like the other peoples vote never counted. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fd5aa9407f1,AB3622039528,When the winner take all method happens voters in toss up states are more likely to pay attention to the campaign. They receive the most information and attention from the candidates. Even if they go all out when its time to start voting that doesnt mean that they should be able to decide the election. Everyone elses vote matters too. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e827122c9cdb,AB3622039528,Some People think that the Electoral Collage should stay because they think that the Electoral Collage is a process not a palce. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+451840542c9f,AB3622039528,"The passage says ""The Electoral Collage process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress."" That just pretty much showed us how they Electoral Collage system worked. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f38b5bfbe0dc,AB3622039528,Even though most people think that the system should stay I think it should go. It should go for many reason. The main reason that I think it should go is because its not fair. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bab394ef92e7,AB59B37ACAED,i argue in favor of keeping  the electoral votes alive to choose for the new turn ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f49f6828cf5,AB59B37ACAED,people say that the electoral voting system may turn alot of potential voters away from voting for a new president since the electoral voting has been tight on alot of people who don't like to use that way then they want it as a direct election and to abolish the electoral college! ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3095cd7be117,AB59B37ACAED,There are alot of ways we can actually save the eletoral voting system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4c0ca75f5817,AB59B37ACAED,"the electoral voting consists of a very non-democratic way so all the voters can decide on a canindate for whoever receives the most highest votes on,in 2000 gore had way more votes than bush but fewer electoral votes on him andthat was since they first ever voting for the presidents back in around 1888 thats a very long time almost 200 years when that happened ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0831335d072d,AB59B37ACAED,"basically we need to keep the electoral voting for some practical reasons thta we do not know about now maybe it could be from thedispute over recent years of voting .
+
+or we can choose a different option then electoral voting maybe instead of the canindates to get voted by a party we should just vote on a popular vote that we should rely on next time it comes around    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5aed60c1765f,AB5D516FC4C3,I think people with a b average should be able to play sports because there grade is a little above average ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9e13d5bbc5d6,AB5D516FC4C3,I think people with a c average should be able to play sports just like people who have a b. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00eb04c24f42,AB5D516FC4C3,"People with a b average should be able to play sports because they do they school work, they do there homework, and they keep there grades up. People with a c average should be able to play they do there work but they can do better to improve there work. Students who have a c or above average should play sports. The students with a b average can help kids keep there grade so the other kids can play sport too. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48afa198a345,AB5D516FC4C3,I think people who have a c or a b average can play sports the work hard to keep up there grades so they can help the team win. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+230e4ea36719,AB5D516FC4C3,"If I change the policy it would be people with a c or above average can play sports but students who have a d or below can't play. The students with a d or below can not play because they do not work hard to keep there grades up. The students that have a d or below think they can play sports, but do not have to do the work ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bac81f0c13ef,AB5D516FC4C3,The students with c or above should be able to play sports because they work hard everyday to keep there grade up. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dfaaac8c3d08,AB5D516FC4C3,if I was the principal I would change the policy to where kid who want to learn and like coming to school should be able to play sports. The kid who want be a student before and athletic should play. The students with d or below should try to focus more on school work than thinking about playing sports. The students who don't try really don't care they just want to play sports because they are good at it and they care about there grades. These are the reason why student with c or above should play sports and people with d or below should not be able ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+614ca181efda,AB5D77D7E5A1,"I wish to address you on how you are considering making community service a requirement for students. First off I'd like to express my feelings on community service then I would like to go on to talk about whether making it required would be a good idea or not. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0b4884f021de,AB5D77D7E5A1,Community service is a great opportunity to help others. ,Position,Effective,,,
+60edb9b66bc8,AB5D77D7E5A1,It not only helps and brings happiness to others but in ways you'll find that doing community service can help you too. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cb7db74ad71b,AB5D77D7E5A1,Many people do it so willingly because of the good feelings they get from knowing that they're making a difference and benefiting someone else without them having someone to pay them to do it. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+1637c3cd4419,AB5D77D7E5A1,It also helps people greater understand charity and service to others of which the feelings you get from doing these things come no other way. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+927aa94ad7f9,AB5D77D7E5A1,In the end most people feel accomplished and they are sometimes helped just as much as the people they were helping. They volunteer most of the time not for money but for reasons like what i just talked about. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+5354ffcefcd8,AB5D77D7E5A1,Though great experiences and feelings can come from doing community service bad ones can too. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0b77f47c7630,AB5D77D7E5A1,When forced to do something a persons natural reaction is to strike out against or oppose it. The students might start to feel this way such as convicts who are assigned community service by the state do. If this happens the service will be done poorly with little effort and the feelings that are supposed to come from it will be pushed away. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+d7df956a2957,AB5D77D7E5A1,"So if you can't force them to do it then how can you get them to do community service?
+
+Encouragement is the answer. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9b960fdb11bc,AB5D77D7E5A1,"By helping and asking politely and advertising community service there will be a far better chance that students will do it, but more importantly they will want to do it. Get the students excited about it and they'll do it and be able to freely experience the great blessings community service has to offer for both sides. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bcfa2a0a919a,AB5D77D7E5A1,"Yes you will have a lot less people that end up doing it, but the people that do will be excited, motivated and ready to make a difference in the world one community at a time. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+33cde84e03d6,AB741655902E,i belive we should trash the electoral college and do popular votes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+886e5022632a,AB741655902E,this way it is simiple and easyer to control. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+282fb4307549,AB741655902E,"people may think they are voting for president when there not (even know they shouod be).we are really voting for electors. i dont see where it is right that thoses electors have to fight for are vote. we should be able to put in are balliets and that be it, not worry weather the electors had a good agument and won the fight. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ead6eeefea70,AB741655902E,the electors dont always vote for who that state wants. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cccce4ff59f9,AB741655902E,when some people go to vote the are confused on the electores and vote the wrong candidate. the electors dont alawys vote for who we want sometimes they put that voite aside and vote for whom ever they wish. in all realaity we dont need them all they do is cause a mess in the prosses. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35eda0713f9d,AB741655902E,so i belive that we shuld stop the electoral college and do direct voit insted. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+187d0f1da463,AB8BE95ADDD7,Having the election by popular vote has benifited our community in various ways ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4c06fa522cd2,AB8BE95ADDD7,"such as, Being able to compare the presidents information and how He or She will help our society and represent us, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5d45d4ea84e1,AB8BE95ADDD7,"It also can allow presidents to feel as if they have a equal chance of winning votes, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b93a7a21217a,AB8BE95ADDD7,Having election by popular votes for the presidents can make our community's can help people get together and talk about which president is better or which on they think has more potential helping out the society ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a2c643eefbc,AB8BE95ADDD7,The electoral college is a way to get votes from people that favor the president or has different belifes and different changes in the next president. Having popular vote for president is a cool way to discover how other people want their society. Most people dont think having popular vote as president is a good idea because they wanna see what will happen or who will become president without there vote being out. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+12a4784789fd,AB8BE95ADDD7,most presidents prefer voting elections because they feel equal and want to have same rights. If most people were in positions like the president they would want to have popular vote because they wouldnt want someine that isnt better then them winning election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb0bfc2f0e4f,AB8BE95ADDD7,"I believe that popular vote has and will contine benifiting our community by equaling out our rights. Helping people get to know the presidents better, and helps the better president represent us.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0978d6d6f605,ABC648A86887,"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+038c57a0a6a0,ABC648A86887,"Under the electoral college, voters vote not for the president, but for a state for electors, who in turn elect the president. The main problem with this is that most of the time voters are oblivious to who their electors vote for. In some cases, ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party candidate and cast a deciding vote for whome ever they please... The states pick the electors that vote for us citizens.
+
+Sometimes the president doesn't even get the most popular vote, but they recieve enough electoral college votes, is this system a scam? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2feda1b6324f,ABC648A86887,"Many accross the world believe this is true, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45b3eca5f90d,ABC648A86887,"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. How whould these voters know who to vote for if they didn't have any idea who was running? They didn't! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1f9fb396b23,ABC648A86887,"People are getting worried and starting to get upset, many asking questions to the public, only to be hushed by the government. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6be29e098fca,ABC648A86887,"The main question everyone wants to know the answer to and are asking is:
+
+When is this whole syatem going to fall apart at the seam?
+
+Some even believe the election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.
+
+Is the electoral college system ever going to change? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f23edb35f70,ABC648A86887,"There are a couple reasons for retaining the electoral college despite it's lack of democraic pedigree;all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+288cbde8af95,ABC648A86887,"Despite the reasons the electoral college is still the unfair, outdated, and irrational system it could be. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+14150ff34d8f,ABC648A86887,"In the facts I have presented, I believe that we need a change in many of our systems, Today the most needed change is the electoral college system. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a9ee2a10f187,ABC648A86887,Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. . . .                               ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a842d3145bc5,ABC9EBAB6670,"Have you ever wondered how the government adds up the votes and determinds who the president is after the election? the Electoral College is a process made in the Constitution, a compromise between the election by Congress and the election by citizens ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+61efa655eae1,ABC9EBAB6670,"Most would say that the Electoral College is reguarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic way of selecting a president. Like every other thing in the world, people form their own opinions. There are pros and cons to everything, even the Electoral College. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+088c46ff94fc,ABC9EBAB6670,"To begin with, the Electoral College is exactly what it sounds like ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8abca481c606,ABC9EBAB6670,"It is a group of highly educated people that come together every year during the presidental election and choose wisely who the want to become president and vice president. Once everyone is complete choosing who they select, they add them up and seperate them by each state. Keep in mind, each state only gets a certain number of electors, depending on how big the state is. For example, Florida, the state that I live in, gets 29 electoral votes, as to Hawii, which only gets four votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef7ecfb11a72,ABC9EBAB6670,"Next, the Electoral College has its pros and cons. One con of the College is they have more of an impact on the choosing of the president than the actual citizens have ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3be8fffdea93,ABC9EBAB6670,"You would think that the people, including both sides of the political parties, would have more of a say on whome becomes the president for the next four to eight years. For instance, multiple people and groups such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commence, And the AFL-CIO have said and agreed on, ""Abolishing the electoral college!"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c8ffbf72a30,ABC9EBAB6670,"Lastly, we have many reasons why we keep the Electoral College ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e760d5ebba2,ABC9EBAB6670,"One reason is certainty of outcome, a president can have more citizen votes than the other, but the losing candidate can still win because of the electoral votes. Another reason this happens is because most states have a winner-take-all basis, meaning that the state chooses and the winning person with the most votes gets a state vote, even if you personally didn't vote for that person. Another reason why is because the U.S. has many larger states and the Electoral College balances it out for them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d11909b7df20,ABC9EBAB6670,"So as you see, the Electoral College is debatable on whether or not it is a good or bad thing. They have pros and cons like everything else in the world.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+77ae3a6cde14,ABFE420BA213,I believe that this could be a good decision but may also be a bad one as well. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6732f76e76e5,ABFE420BA213,Many of the students that care only for there sports or other activities and that don't do very well in school will keep up with there work only because they want to do that one sport or other activity. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1a28deab6cf,ABFE420BA213,"This might separate the people who are really determined with there academic achievements and the people who only want to play there sport or activities. The people that only want to play there sport may drop out because being able to do that thing will be just another step harder ,while the people that want to do good in school will continue to do good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c43a288dce4,ABFE420BA213,"The people who ,not only want to play sports or other activities but are willing to do good in school will do better in school because of the worry that they might not be able to do this anymore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d45b022c7d4e,ABFE420BA213,So this decision may benefit the school in a way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f8ef81ea98bc,ABFE420BA213,make sure that you look at the schools benefit as a whole. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+27d2a1a1aafb,AC2463899B0F,I believe that the Electoral College vote should be abolished ,Position,Adequate,,,
+de205fc95c68,AC2463899B0F,because they are not giving citizens their rights to vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2081a010485,AC2463899B0F,there is certainty of outcome ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3306aa64553a,AC2463899B0F,"the winner takes all method that they are doing, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+60ce9059845e,AC2463899B0F,and the voting electors are not voting percisely. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d63c8be171e,AC2463899B0F,"To me I believe that the Electoral College is cruel and unusual punishment, because they are not giving citizens their voting rights ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c034ebc4bf3f,AC2463899B0F,"They make it seem like the citizens are going to be the ones voting for the president but in reality the citizens are actually voting for electors whom are going to be voting for the president. The Electoral College is regarded as an anachronism that should be overuled. Its declaring the canidate with the most vote to be the winner, which is not really giving the citizens the chance to vote for they want to be their president. Advocates are arguing about the Electoral College not being a modern sense, and how it is the electors voting for the president and not the people/citizens. When citizens vote for the president they dont actually know that theya re voting for a slate for the elelctors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1cb157c0e1d,AC2463899B0F,They Electoral College has a massive rate in certainty of outcome ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bc1f1a2b2a10,AC2463899B0F,"Just like the dispute over outcome of votes that happened in 2000 can happen again, because the electors are not being fair with the votes. This is becasue the winning canidate shares his popular vote with the electorals. Just like Barack Obama was elected for president, he only recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to the popular votes of 51.3 percent ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7babdf01ae6,AC2463899B0F,Almost all the states award electoral votes with the winner-takes- all mehtod that they created ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+732eb979053a,AC2463899B0F,"A tie can be possible in electorals votes but, the total number of votes is 538 which is an even number but, is not very likely that it would happen. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+75f035c2ef54,AC2463899B0F,The electors are not voting fair or percisely ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53ed669461b1,AC2463899B0F,It can and has been argued that the Electoral College ways of selecting the president may turn voters for a cannidate who has no hope for running a state. Democrats in either Texas or  Republicans in California dont pay not type of attention to the voting or even to the president that was picked by the popular votes. The Electoral College has no intention in trying to change thier pursiut for electing a president so that citizens will have a chance to cast a vote on picking who they believe should be president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adf78565bd1a,AC2463899B0F,"I believe that the Electoral College should be abolished, because they are not giving citizens their rights to vote, certianty of outcome , the winner-takes-all method, and electors are not voting fair and perisely. I also believe that if they use something more mordern that it would make it esaier for voting and electing so theat they wont have to worry about the problems with electing a new president. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff99cd0f4029,AC470B5D0675,"The Face, a well known landmark on the planet of Mars, is a landmark that has caused NASA a lot of debate. The debate is ""Was The Face created by aliens, or was it created by natural landform?"". This has caused NASA and many scientists to have problems, because there are a few scientists that believe that The Face was created by aliens. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d87e52c0f94a,AC470B5D0675,"The Face was originally discover in 1976, by the photographers aboard NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. In the picture taken in 1976, you can clearly see a face in the landform. But in the picture taken in 1998, the atmosphere was extremely cloudy, so if there was any indention in Mars's base, you couldn't see it because of the clouds. Because of this, scientists went out on another attempt to capture a good image of The Fcae on Mars, and they succeeded. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cfb7c7c57b0b,AC470B5D0675,"The picture that was taken in 2001 clearly showed that The Face was no longer there, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d2b50d64e08e,AC470B5D0675,which lead scientists to believe that it was a combination of natural landform and the shadows casted from the sun's rays that made that particular spot look like    ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+28105a1c599b,AC588B53A805,"When you see this face like formation what do you think? Aliens, rocks, sand? Well if you thought any of those it would be rocks and sand. Some people actually beleived this was made by extra terrestrials on Mars but no it's not ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c86fbfecc465,AC588B53A805,"This is just a rock formation found by NASA who thought at first it might have been an extra terrestrail creation. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+5cbf5c2fd259,AC588B53A805,"This is not an alien creation if it were there would be arms, legs, or maybe a body poking out of the sand and rocks. But if it is something we probably wont know for another century or a few decades. But if there is extra terrestrial life on Mars we won't know for a very long time. If aliens did create this then where are they, did they just leave Mars or get wiped out. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fdd00e6485c,AC588B53A805,If this was created by aliens they should still be on Mars or at least signs of them should still be there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb79c2c46e1d,AC588B53A805,The face still kind of looks like a face in 2001 even though it show sand and maybe thats a little mountain. but it still oddly resembles a face. There might be other stuff like this on Mars in uninvestigated areas and maybe one or two have been made by aliens or other life. We found water on Mars so something had to have inhabitted Mars atr least once. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+308c530c7d65,AC588B53A805,Maybe mars was like Earth at one point in time and there was extra terrestrial life on Mars but something made them leave and made Mars just a floating sandy rock in space. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+0b776a03b1bd,AC588B53A805,"But the face that they found on Mars was just a mesa, but who knows this could be some crazy alien statue buried underground we won't know for a while though. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0c41d1d9421f,AC5AEE18D31E,Electoral college has helped in many ways. Many people have suggested keeping the electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of United States. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+0d0e037d8829,AC5AEE18D31E,I believe that changing to election by popular vote for the president would be best bescause ,Position,Effective,,,
+5985d7c0ae98,AC5AEE18D31E,first the more people who vote its easier to determine who would become president ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a237fdf10f66,AC5AEE18D31E,because it will aviod any problems having to choose for president. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7a0e038183dc,AC5AEE18D31E,Now a days  alot of things have helped the electoral college but in other cases it has not . Changing to election by popular vote can help by choosing the winner and still having its defenders. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e22593caed0,AC5AEE18D31E,Also it may help by when they need to find out the winner they know exactly who it is . They can get their election faster and quicker by changing the election vote to the most popular vote for the united states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+353ff6d44da9,AC5AEE18D31E,People still suggest that keeping the electoral college would be better ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+296552b57e57,AC5AEE18D31E,but chnging it to popular vote would be the best option ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f9a72ca91cbb,AC5AEE18D31E,Presidents and electors have had trouble with the eletoral college when having to elect for president of the united states . If changing it to popular vote for president it will sviod any troubles and problems when electing the president . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+593d2a8f0dff,AC5AEE18D31E,They will still have senators and still have enough votes to choose and elect the president and have no problem at all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+221701654000,AC5AEE18D31E,"Like people may think yes , electoral college should stay and should not be changed to popular vote in electing the president ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+698fa37080b1,AC5AEE18D31E,but i think that is best . Everyne has their own opinion in matters like this but in this case i think whats best to change the electoral college . ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+57553f1c47ae,AC5AEE18D31E,In conclusion to this everything is always done for the better and i think that changing the elcetors to popular vote for the president would be easier and less problems for alot of people. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f4770d338ef3,AC78193CD7B9,I do not think that it is a good idea to require students to perform community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+77e11d4f9c9f,AC78193CD7B9,"I, for one, enjoy doing community service, but if it is required, many other students may be upset and object. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b775d1052e3f,AC78193CD7B9,"The students might be upset because maybe some don't like the community, or doing any extra work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea01625c2f3e,AC78193CD7B9,Other students may be unhappy with the idea because they may have to give up some of the extracurricular activities in order to find time to do community service work. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7f1db9d7d76d,AC78193CD7B9,"First of all, many kids at my school do not have enough time to do any amount of community service. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5a89818bde88,AC78193CD7B9,"Some teens have sports, commitments, and maybe even part-time jobs.
+
+Others may have to watch their younger siblings at home because their parents come home late at night and are unable to care for the little children.
+
+Therefore, teens in these types of situations would not be able to do any community work, or they would have to give something up, like a sport that they love ,or a job that they need to support their family. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+128f1d46bcd9,AC78193CD7B9,"Second, some families do not like this community and do not agree with how it works. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+a809a7477d6e,AC78193CD7B9,"The kids from those families would probably get in trouble because their beliefs, and would have to do service even though they don't want to.
+
+This may cause disagreements with the school and the family.
+
+I think it would be a bit unfair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+45b483cc1d72,AC78193CD7B9,"Lastly, other people think that this doing community service is not important because they do not feel like part of it, or maybe they just don't like it that much. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+80da43e06c4b,AC78193CD7B9,"I know a couple of people that would never do community service, and if they had to , they would do it half-heartedly and with disdain. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+41d42ddcf613,AC78193CD7B9,"Although doing community service is a great thing, should people really be doing it if they don't want to? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e81759134e8,AC78193CD7B9,"I believe that no one should do community service if they aren't going to put their whole heart and effort into it.
+
+If kids who don't want to do community service are required to do so, their work would probably be ineffective because of lack of their work motive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c626394fa100,AC78193CD7B9,"These are just some reasons why I think requiring students to do community service work is a bad idea. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+03c3a0ab6de7,AC871BBF14B5,The faces that appear on mars is probably made by aliens or made by natural land changes that is happening all around on mars and is creating the human like faces on mars. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+fca4467ee852,AC871BBF14B5,The natural landforms that mars is making peope think that its made by aliens ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e0d98d6b1b26,AC871BBF14B5,but in reality its just an illusion that it happeing with the stars and everything within space. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c535bf9a1c7a,AC871BBF14B5,The mountains that are being formed my natural landforms are making faces in mars ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+92696b3b1077,AC871BBF14B5,"people are saying that its aliens are probably telling us to go away and that we are being watched by alleins, But in reality its just formed by natural landform and its just an illusion happening. When they launched the pictures to go up on their JPL website probabaly thounsands and thounsands of consiracy theroists thought that it was made by aleins and not by natural landform changes when they told the whole world that it was natural landform changes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ec6453358c7,ACA08DBF39EE,"In my opinion, the students tanking to attend classes from home, by way of oline or video conferencing. I think the students not have benefit from being able to attent classes from home. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+40c949736107,ACA08DBF39EE,"First, the students has more distraction in home; ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+93d8b633e857,ACA08DBF39EE,"with vedeo play, and othe oction, more students work a time with taking a class, more with have a classes in distance, the schools need a tanking a other options. With lern in school the students are more specific learn, with a have a teacher opposite the student to learnig more specific, when she tanking the classes to has a more effective for a students. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bbdb135f70e,ACA08DBF39EE,"Second, I hink this option for learning offer the class in distance wich a attend classes from home ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7ae3fc433acd,ACA08DBF39EE,"not is a good option for example: in my house a have three brothers, and one sister, I think is distraction wich learning in home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f497547c24a,ACA08DBF39EE,"In finally; with reason with not is good idea the learning a distance the school, I think is more elementary, basic to taking the video conferencing online, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b359f9b3479f,ACA08DBF39EE,"because; learning more in the watch the vedeo conference, with online; is more effective memorize with the morning in not in evening, the students have forceful in the morning, but no think this is a good option for a students, not have a good benefit from being able to attend classes from home. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f197d2a3f58,ACA08DBF39EE,"Conclucion; the students not taking the classes from the house or distance learning, but students learning more when she go to the schools. The parents thinks exactly whit me, because is most effective taking the classes in the schools, in not a distance the schols.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dc60789ac2a5,ACAB1FCA0A30,I would like to change the election for the president of the United States. I would like to vote for president myself and not for a slate of electors because then I can't really control who the electors vote for. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f28c96d8eab,ACAB1FCA0A30,Electors in the past have refused to vote for their party's candidate and I would be very mad if that happened to me. Voters feel like their votes don't coun ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+315fee8d0d55,ACAB1FCA0A30,"The Electoral College, to voters, is unfair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18b2107c3517,ACAB1FCA0A30,"I don't like that representatives from each state, represent a number of voters that make a huge difference such as numbers from the hundred-thousands to the millions ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+370024a4e4ad,ACAB1FCA0A30,"Thats the only good reason about the Electoral College, when voter numbers from each state have a huge difference apart and the electors cast their own vote, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+722f30b7d1dc,ACAB1FCA0A30,"but when voter numbers don't have a huge difference apart, I don't like what the elector ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d4e091c4c7ae,ACAB1FCA0A30,"The number of electoral votes given to each state is bad because there can be a lot of the same numbers and an example is, Texas has 38 votes and North Dakota, South Dakota, and Montana all of 3 votes. Each party has to have trusted electors because too me, if each party has trusted electors, then maybe a lot of the votes won't be the same. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3e58863a118,ACAB1FCA0A30,"If the votes between the two candidates, are a tie, the voters still can't vote for them, themselves. Voters in toss-up should mainly be able to decide the election because they usually really listen to the competing candidates so they are usually the most thoughtful. Votes in big states aren't fair to smaller states because presidential candidates give alot of attention to big states than to small states. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d52b5f592578,ACAB1FCA0A30,"The Electoral College, can sometimes give voters no hope to the candidate they want to win because electors could vote for the other candidate. An example is, Republicans in a state might eventually know that their vote will have no effect so they end up paying less attention the the competing presidential candidates. I think that thats a reason how plurality happens and voters think its unfair.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+609189e198bb,ACE3E472041C,"Does taking classes from home benefit students.
+
+People might said that,taking classes from home is a bad idea, that is not useful that kids don't learn and they do nothing. In case other people will said that it benefit kids , that keep them safe and I will agree by saying that taking classes from home benefits kids.
+
+Well I think that parents, who decided that their kids need to take classes online is for one of many reasons. for example , I will provided you three reasons why ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+db0df62a2c15,ACE3E472041C,I think kids do home classes and it does benefits them and yes they learn from it . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0c62387d9d29,ACE3E472041C,"Parents are famous and they cant send their kids to a regular school, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dc6de0e33465,ACE3E472041C,kids might be in danger and they can attend school because of tha ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b1f6760f243,ACE3E472041C,it might be because they have any medical condition. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+45950fb68733,ACE3E472041C,"First reason why students take classes from home is probably because their parents are famous people and they know that, if they send their kid to any school, people will be chasing them,asking for pictures all the time or may be telling them bad stuff. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+45b21e18e88e,ACE3E472041C,"Parents know that in that situation kids are going to be frustrated about it, sad, angry and defently they will not be able to concentrated at school. It will be hard for them to be free and enjoy school. For example on of my friends he is very famous in my country and also in here wherever he goes people is always chasing him, hi has a kid that is 6 .years old but he said that the hardest part is when the little boy goes out all of these people get to him and he gets scared. That's why he said that he decided to pay for home classes, and they prefer their kids to take classes at home. Kids will feel free and no body will be making them feel uncomfortable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d5fdb8858602,ACE3E472041C,Second reason it could be because the life of any kid can be in danger and the parent of the kid and also any school will know it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+671edd73a7fa,ACE3E472041C,"They know that if any kid, that is been treated lets said by any organization, attends to school people will try to harm him or it can become a bigger problem. Because the school will defently knows that if they received that kid at school they will be putting the life of many other kids at school in risk and they will not take that change. Of course parents are not going to allow that their kids to be harm or kill. That's why the school or parents proffered to have their kid to take his/her classes from home he/she will be safe and other people too, the kid will get a really good benefit from it because he will learn and he will be safe and other people will be too. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a25693c5e751,ACE3E472041C,Last reason why students get benefits from taking classes at home is probably because they have any medical condition and it's hard for them to attend any school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e4b48b5d9f6,ACE3E472041C,"They will feel shame,afraid,scared and they will be thinking that everyone at school is going to make fun of He/She, that they will bully Him/Her and of course as I have said before parents will never for any reason are going to let their kids to be unhappy to feel bad to feel frustrated and feel that no body love them that's why they let their ids stay at home and take classes from it so that way they learn and no body will harm them make they feel worthless. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1c761ae6327,ACE3E472041C,"in conclusion,parents who made the decision to let their kids stay at home and take classes from home they make one of the biggest and hardest decisions in life. Because they know that kids will be safe nobody will hurt them, be hunting them , no body will hurt them, tell them mean stuff. They will not feel embarrassed to let people see them, Parents know that defently is not going to be the same that it will not be the same as if he was listening directly to his teacher and getting his note but they know that at least his kids are going to be safe and they will learn to they will still get benefits from it.
+
+When you want the best for your kids and you love them more that life itself, you do what you got to do if that means to pay for his classes in other to keep them safe,and we all know that people might talk and told you that doing home classes isn't going to help you. But you know that is not true, you got to keep working working hard because sometimes students come to school, but they do nothing. What they do is get in problems fight, with other classmates or eventhey fight whith their teachers,they used drugs at school but. If you know your kid is at home working and you see that he wants to learn the don't listen to the rest of the people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cc01307709b6,AD005493F9BF,"To the state and the state's country, the election of our president must be seen carefully and wisely. As the citizens of the state, people must realize that choosing someone to take control of orders and regulations and the way the country evolves, is a process that needs to be thought of and taken fairly. The president is to serve the people of his country well with responisbilities that can vary to meet the needs of the country,but the electoral college seems to become more and more unfair to those who vote. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9b5781be5689,AD005493F9BF,"It must be changed to meet the needs of giving a responisble president, a more trustworthy election and the votes cast must be directly towards him rather than the electors. In other words, the Electoral College must be changed to become more fair towards the citizens. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0c845b40e210,AD005493F9BF,"The United States Of America, is of course a massive country with large variations of different needs. All over, there are people who vary in opinions, beliefs and lifestyle which can cause the Election of the president to become an important subject matter. To meet the needs of so many people, instead the Electoral college must not choose a president that takes up space, but instead have a right mind to be responisble in taking charge of the country and the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12e74d6b4290,AD005493F9BF,"Things like creating rules to attend the needs of all citizens and create equality amongst them, to keeping harm from out of reach, the Electoral College should become much more wiser in choosing the right ruler to take control. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b1e293664d07,AD005493F9BF,"In the article
+
+What Is The Electoral College by the office of the Federal Register, it states that the election process is held every four years along with the after election prepared by the govenor titled ""Certificate Of Ascertainment"" which sums the canadidates and electors as well as the winning canadidate. It is obvious that the voters only know so much of what they vote for and do not really get a good taste of how the presidential canadidate is like. It can be clear that as a blind election, the voters have no hints of who they might be voting towards and in the end can cause a major catasrophe if a canadidate has very little intentions for the states. In agreement to the article the text
+
+In the defense of the electoral college by Richard A. Posner it begins to sate the election of Romney who, by increasing his plurality and possesing only regional appeal, lost the peoples desire to vote for him thinking that the man has no regards for their interest and does not have any intentions of improving their needs or helping with creating a community where the people can rely on Romney. The actions taken began to change the thoughts of the citizens and create a petrifying conclusion that the man was not on the run to be everyone's president. This dilema could have been changed around if Romney had shown that he had cared more for his state and his country and thought more about the needs he could fill and the actions he could improve, then many of the voters would have most likely shown repsect and a desire for the man to be choosen as their new president. On the opposing hand Romney had not shown any of those qualities or passion which had caused for him to be thought of as unresponisble and selfish.
+
+The country has more than thousands and thousands of people to serve and direct. It can be understood that having a large amount of citizens can result in uncertainty towards the election and the votes cast, yet it is yet to be changed to a more reasonable way of confronting it. With many systems such as ""Winner-Take -All"" due to states titled as the ""Swing States,"" it can be an untrustworthy election fo rmany voters around the country. The election process not only need to be changed to select a more responsible canadidate, but to create a more trustworthy system of itself. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2bc6c1704369,AD005493F9BF,"There is very little equality when it comes to elections especially, when the states are giving an unreliable system to choose for them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+292b6db04f40,AD005493F9BF,"States that are considered ""Toss Ups"" are selfishly awarded the system named ""Winner-Takes-All"" due to how they apparently pay closer attention to the campaign. In the article
+
+What Is The Electotal College by the office of the Federal Register, the method is first introduced in paragraph 7. Stating that the purpose of the ""Winner-Take-All"" system is not only,but to award all electors to the winning canadidate. It is said to be unrelaible and untrustworthy due to it's focus on states that appear t have more attention towards the election. On a more basic level, some states such as Rhode Island and South Carolina had not even witness the campaign and even leaving a few voters to have no say. Going back to the misunderstanding of the election of Romney,the country wittnessed an iresponsible canadidate that had ran for president. With the unreliable ridiculous system ""Winner-Take-All"" some states may or may not have even experienced how Romney had acted and his intentions towards the elections and the campiagn. With very little knowledge of the presidential canadidate and with limitations of voting and campaign ads, there is very little trust given towards the election process especially with more than a few states that are not being taken very seriously, with very little say. If the Electorial College could give off more information and more become more reliable towards all states, the process would be less sinister and more apreciated. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c946804bfc84,AD005493F9BF,There are many more other factors in which the Electorial College must be changed to meet the appropriate dilemas and needs of the voters and their intentions towards the campaign. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9fc5e37dcbe1,AD005493F9BF,"On the other hand, it has not changed at all only to stay unfair towards the entire country and possibly cause a catasrophe. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f75cccebe930,AD005493F9BF,"Let us say, there have been many incidents where elections have been on the edge of a major dilema. Wondering why a straight up orderly process can go to the point of a catasrophe, can all be easily explained as unfair.
+
+All can be simplified in the article
+
+Why Even The Best-Laid Defesnes of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer, states back to the disater factor of the election of John F.Kennedy. It states back to the 1960's where faithless electors had pushed aside the votes and sayings of Louisiana had decided to vote for whomever they had wanted. It had caused a problem of course since the votes where not even of the people, but of the selfish sick minds of the electors who toke the process into their own hands. In the same paragraph it staes back to when the state of Hawaii had sent in two slates of electors to congress. With the unreliable actions of Richard Nixion,  had validated his opponent's electors of course to win over the campaign. once again another issue arises in the article
+
+Five Reasons To Keep Our Despised Method Of Choosing The President, it agrees with the unfairness of the electorals by giving the example of how the Electorial College had turned off the potential voters due to the knowledge that their votes will be uncared for. In paragraph 23, it states that in the state of Texas, it was known that the votes would have know effect of the campaign what so ever. It aslo had staes that voters in politcal elections have no care rather than to express the political refrence than what the peole think or decide. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fdcca4acf665,AD005493F9BF,This sums up that the process is unfair to many of the states voters and must be changed to become more open and share the equality with those who are losing thier trust. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cb7fe6607fbd,AD005493F9BF,"In conclusion, the Electorial College mut be changed to meet the need of those who agree that is it irresponisble when givng a repsonisble president, a more trustworhty election and an unfair process. Yet this can all be fixed simply by changing the ways it is run and to give more freedom for the people ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9f76d590ee25,AD1914496798,"The elector college is a controversial subject today in america, based on many questionable policies that leave many americans confused and cheated. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+46d03ccd8c3d,AD1914496798,This is why I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Effective,,,
+9df75cb9913e,AD1914496798,"With the electoral college way of electing a president voters arent actually voting for the president, they are voting for a slate of electors who will then vote for the candidate. There are so many things that can go wrong when electing like this ",Claim,Effective,,,
+abd4c6fc0163,AD1914496798,"Voters can't neccessarily control who their electors vote for, you may vote for a certain slate of electors but they may still go ahead and vote for someone else. Sometimes voters get confused and may vote for a slate of electors who are for the wrong candidate. For example, in 1960 segragationists in the Louisiana Legislature almost succeded in replacing the democratic electors with new ones who would oppose John F. Kennedy, so a popular vote for Kennedy would not actually go to him. Although these things dont happen all time their is always the possibility and why take that chance on such an important event, choosing our president the person who will lead our country. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+962bb29c09dd,AD1914496798,"In an election their really is a process of voting and voting again. Instead of couting the number of people who want a certain president and so on. We are viewed as a state and some states having more say than other even if the votes are in the same margin. This is the reason why some states are focused on more by the candidates and are heavily educated on the topic and given more attention than smaller states whose votes wont change much. an even bigger problem is te fact that most states operate on a winner-take-all basis so even a slight majority vote one way will give that person all of the votes. A very worrying prospect as expressed in source two is the possibility of a tie. in which the election would be given to the house of representatives. Each state only gets on vote so a representative representing 500,000 people would have as much say as representatives representing 35 million people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2916b2eaac60,AD1914496798,Why not just cut out all of the extra processes and focuses on the decision of the people directly ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4f3ea210ba6,AD1914496798,Although there are many arguments against the electoral college there still are people who argue in favor of it. There is a certainty of outcome with this process. There will less likely be a run off election with this process ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+83d7ef9191e6,AD1914496798,"All in all the major arguments agaisnt this process outweigh the pros of it, which are few. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+97935cb3f636,AD1914496798,With all of the reasons to go against this process I think it is necessary to change the election to popular vote for the president. We need to give the voice directly back to the people of our country so we know that we really do choose our fate in these elections. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4382006d8a07,AD3C6F02167E,I believe that community service is extremely important and that all students should be required to perform some community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+17c53c628843,AD3C6F02167E,"Community service helps out the community a lot, so the students will be making their homes a better place to live and learn. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c2c47a305f4c,AD3C6F02167E,"Another thing that community service does is that it helps build character in a child, because they are constantly helping people out and doing the right thing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b6d09fdcbff,AD3C6F02167E,"Next, community service will help with your education, because kids who do community service are more likely to get into a good college. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8f652034110f,AD3C6F02167E,"First of all, community service makes the place you live a better place, by creating a better environment to work, learn and live, as well as make everyone happier. The community benefits a lot from kids or adults actively participating in community service. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bc294c605af8,AD3C6F02167E,"Research shows, that the cleaner and more beautiful the town or city is, the happier the people are. Who is happy when they are living in a trash can? Community service helps clean up the town, by simple things like picking up trash, or larger projects like planting trees. Education also benefits from community service, because we can teach the younger generation skills they need to grow up. Also, a better looking school, would be a better place to learn, because the students will be happier and more motivated. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8eb80a887440,AD3C6F02167E,"Secondly, students and adults who perform community service build a lot of character. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c005b340a2c,AD3C6F02167E,"This is because they are constantly helping people out, and doing the right thing. This way they will feel good about themselves, and will be a better person overall. I am a boy scout, and i always participate in activities such as, help cleaning up a state park, and help cleaning up the Connecticut River. After i do these things, i feel ready good about myself because i did the right thing, and helped out our community a lot. Furthermore, scientist have shown that students who do community service have a better chance of having a happy life than people who don't, because you will always feel good about yourself and how you have helped your community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7e19a722b7fe,AD3C6F02167E,"Another reason that community service is very important, is because many ivy league colleges, and other colleges in general, are always looking for people who regularly participate in community service and also volunteer. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+454895f65f4c,AD3C6F02167E,"I personally knew a person, who didn't have all A's in school, and didn't get a great score on the SAT's, but she was an volunteer at a hospital and part of a organization that helps homeless people. She got accepted into Harvard University because she did all that community service. Community service helps out a lot in our lives, by both building character and also it helps tremendously in applying for college. In addition, it also helps a lot with our education, because last year we won our regional science bowl, because some high school students decided to help out our them and come to our practices to teach us. This was very helpful for us and we benefited a lot because of that. They probably also felt better about themselves that they were teaching the younger generation and helping us out. People don't know how much you can learn from kids older than you. you can probably learn more from them than teachers, because you look up to them and respect them the same or maybe more than your teachers. So community service is extremely in education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+92f786cb9a7f,AD3C6F02167E,"In conclusion, I believe that community service helps out a lot with our growth and development, either by education, or building character. Both of those are super important in our life. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e50f4d72fac3,AD3C6F02167E,"Studies show that people who do community service are 3 times more likely to succeed than people who don't. And the community benefits from these acts too, because you are making your town a happier and better place to live. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43117f97ea58,ADB68BCD2874,This face is not because of aliens it was just a landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+743de40e08fc,ADB68BCD2874,"""Nevertheless on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Sureyor drew close enough for a second look. ""We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to center the Face in the field of view,"" said Garvin. ""Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution."" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 merterd per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83645376434f,ADB68BCD2874,"""as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than pixel size,"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2212fad86a41,ADB68BCD2874,"if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66fe178688a1,ADB68BCD2874,What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca31293ee103,ADB68BCD2874,"""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" says Garvin ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d628a6adda3a,ADB68BCD2874,"""That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1a2ee1d7ba5f,ADB68BCD2874,These are all reasons that this is no because of aliens but it is a landform. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+02e5b0f37696,ADD7CE85B73C,Students should be able to have cell phones at school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a1f93176b400,ADD7CE85B73C,what harm is it doing to the child if they text during a passing period or during lunch? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13fe87a6a8d9,ADD7CE85B73C,Its not hurting anybody as long as the phone is turned off and doesn't cause a distraction during class time then why would it be a problem? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f0463961ae2,ADD7CE85B73C,I know that some teenagers will still try to text during class but the number of people who do will go down ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e44f0f48f7f5,ADD7CE85B73C,The school should treat students and teachers fairly. If there trying to be fair then the teachers shouldn't be aloud to use there cell phones during class either. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+991c8096c7e9,ADD7CE85B73C,Cell phones aren't even that bad in the first place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fdbc4d8561a0,ADD7CE85B73C,"Yes, most of Americans use them to much, and they are a huge distraction most of the time ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d80d452cc950,ADD7CE85B73C,but they still haven't done any harm to the American society. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+476304ae8a01,ADD7CE85B73C,Actually cell phones have actually brought a lot of people closer together. They also serve the purpose to help people out. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae9a8e36784c,ADD7CE85B73C,"I understand there's not that great of a purpose to having a cell phone at school, but it would make the student body a whole lot happier than it is today. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e81422c3671,ADD7CE85B73C,"Just the short time we have during class would just be so much better for everybody in the entire school. I still don't even understand why we aren't aloud to use them during class. Why do the teachers care, there getting paid? If a student doesn't want to listen then they shouldn't be forced too. Kids go to school to get a education i understand it shouldn't be interrupted by cell phones. but kids need to have a good time well learning. School is a place for education but come on at least let kids have some socialization. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28f036fc6597,ADD7CE85B73C,Letting kids use cell phones during class would be a huge deal to everybody at SCHOOL_NAME it will make the three years we have at this school go by as fast as possiable. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dbed156df07f,ADDA081EE98A,I would like to in favor of keeping the Electoral College for many purposes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1a456088d4ec,ADDA081EE98A,The Electoral College know the process of becoming a president and some of the people voting dont really know how the process works. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35fdc69f6577,ADDA081EE98A,"The eletors are the one to elect the president and not the people,people's vote will not have any affect of the election of the president. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f11b2e020800,ADDA081EE98A,"what if we the people just vote and we dont know if our vote counts. The excerpt states""when you vote for a presidential candiate you're actually voting for a slate of electors"". This indicates that we think our vote if for the election of the president but its not. Therefore,we should pay attention of who we elect and knowing how the voting system work out. keep on mind that the electoral college is a good system and that we should count on them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51de3fd69091,ADDA081EE98A,"""270 electoral votes is requierd to elect the president"",this indicates that we dont really have control of picking the president. ""it's possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote"", but does'nt often happen. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+474749be4296,ADDA081EE98A,"It all comes down to one point,we should let the Electoral College choose who they want to elect the president. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0279ba5d32a0,ADFE2CDB6FF1,Yes i think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a3f9a62f4cd,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"in the way that they can be more ready to start the class, and they will focus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+001d99b4f21b,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"The reason why i though that is because sometimes at school the students they have shame to show to other the best of them, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8bbdd59974fe,ADFE2CDB6FF1,""" the intelligent student told me that i can't do anything or i can't speak very well English"" still if we want make our goals we can do it. Without go to the school.
+
+-For example:
+
+If a student is on his house alone with no one told him what or how he need to do the correct things, but he has a lot of question about what he is doing in his online class. He will try to find the way to solve the problem by himself. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19f4ec788307,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"
+Also if i was in my home find new imformation and i work to much during the day then i would be hungry then i can go to the kitchen for cook something very fast and go back to my room continue with my homework. And if i have a question i will ask for help to some teacher by texting. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+080bfca90a5d,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"Eventually, attend classes at home with no pressure could made different and confortable for the students who are shy or maybe need a teacher only for one student for explain the class that the student is taking. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f646887a73f,ADFE2CDB6FF1,Below for those students that don't like to wake up too early in the morningt they have the choose to study more later since at night without necesary be ready for school. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+493e27a0b73b,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"Many cases when girls are pregnant they can still going at school, but it was diffult for them had to continue study and also after that they giving birth too. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07747812be5b,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"i know that because a friend told me and another girls too, she told us the process that she has to pass during her pregnancy and after when she has her baby with her I don't know how hard it is, but i can imagine in this position. So what my friend do? during her pregnancy she still coming to the school i saw her many time she was so tired with her belly and then when she has her baby yet she take in her house the next classes i was surprise about it either i do not how unconfortable it was for her that a teacher was with her when the baby start cry or when the baby need to eat, later she was done she back to the school but she didn't feel ok for leave her baby at home. This story make me think about it if i have the election to choose how i can study i prefer study and take the classes in my house better that school. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+207b5f73bb0f,ADFE2CDB6FF1,I think the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that's great idea. but there are many problems, ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,
+a1622e278a08,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"what happen if the student do not have money to pay the online classes? either their families do not have the recourses for help them another reason that's why we have to work and make money for us and we missing many days in the school for stay at home because we want sleep more hours or we coming to the school and we are no pay attention what the teacher is talk about the class, So i think this if a student want money need to work and continue study online maybe in that way is more easy pass the class and the SOL ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e2b23791b2e,ADFE2CDB6FF1,Attend classes from home by way online help this type of case the students go to work few hours and then coming home for the rest of the day to study or another option is one day work and the next day don't and stay at home taking the online classes ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+48173a428b6f,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"in summary ""NEVER GIVE UP"" when we want something that we can't get it in nowhere only in our effort we can make that possible. Also with some help ask when we do not understand something and put the best of us all including: try to solve the problems, research good imformation, and the most importat thing that we have to do is study. sometimes the other people make feel us so bad or without no reason to be in this world, go ahead and desmostrate to that person who do not believe in you that you can do it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ac5424c12fd,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"During school year is possible learning for online or video conferencing,in the videos explain clearly what or how to solve math ejercise or another kind of materials. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d32e360e6d2,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"Examples of benefit to attend classes at home are:
+
+- Spend more time in the computer
+
+- More focus in the homework
+
+- Use the iphone for imformation whenever we want
+
+- Study all the day
+
+- No talk with your friends during your class
+
+- Finish more fast with no distraction ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bb1952fbda9,ADFE2CDB6FF1,"All that things are benfit if the students being to attend classes in their home in the winter they don't have to worry about how cold is outside in the morning or what clothes is appropriate for school, and have to coming in the school in a good mood for study and see somebody that we do not want to see and prevent be involve in problems with another student. Could fine stay at home by self in own class than go to the school. Many student suffer of depreciation and that is so bad for them. If they school giving to them the opportunities to take the classes online it is more better for their healthy, this is my opinion about attend classes on the home.                 ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5bca4b9d2c20,AE3C9DE4FA94,I'm in favor of kipping the Electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8d8e4f99f5a7,AE3C9DE4FA94,keep out problems and  its fare to evry one. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+43b70e8ab521,AE3C9DE4FA94,In the text state that ''The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the president.'' that shows that the popular vote is the one who wins. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c6191ac4a29,AE3C9DE4FA94,''The college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast,'' ,Claim,Adequate,,
+32ebefc2324f,AE3C9DE4FA94,is tre because without the electoral college it will have a lot of candidates that they will not get a majority of vote nether one. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29d724099354,AE3C9DE4FA94,"by the way, a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible and it hat happend before ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c197e862ed9f,AE3C9DE4FA94,but it's less likely than a dispute over the populat vote. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b592daf021be,AE3C9DE4FA94,Voters in presidential elections are people who wants to express a political preference eather than people who thinks that a single vote may decide an elections        ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+436a45ee8e0f,AE3CD422AAF4,The President should be chosen by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fcd48b7e2724,AE3CD422AAF4,"By letting the people choose who sould be their President they are able to get what they want, not what Congress thinks they want. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3650285cf0eb,AE3CD422AAF4,The Electoral College system is old news and now that we are in 2015 there are all sorts of new things going on. The Electoral College system is just too much and seems like a hassle that can be made easier by having qualified citizens vote for their President. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+79c754ed89ea,AE3CD422AAF4,Under The Electoral College system voters are voting for electors who choose the President for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+44e9781cfde0,AE3CD422AAF4,"I feel that the people should be able to put in their votes and the man (or woman) who has the majority of the votes should be the President. I am aware that choosing the President is a big deal but by doing this, things are much easier and more efficent. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+49327dff2e2e,AE3CD422AAF4,"What I am trying to say is that the Electoral College system is way too flawed and complicated to be good for us. I feel as though the Electoral College system is unfair, and irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f84355ddef5e,AE3CD422AAF4,Electors have been known to refuse to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever. Richard Nixon validated only his oppenent's electors as well. People can take this system to advantage easily and obuse it to get what they want. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1aa1d2b06a95,AE3CD422AAF4,By choosing the President through popular vote it is very difficult to mess up the amount of votes for one person. You can keep supervision on the voting stands and make sure nobody puts in more than one vote for one person and also monitor the people who sort the votes. People are very selfish and only think of themselves and thats why you shouldn't have other people go and vote for the party's canidate. The Electoral College system was made when thinking out of the box wasn't a good thing. The Electoral College system is unfair for voters and outdated.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+74771533c6f5,AE5D214AAC85,"I think you should require community service to every kid in the school, Because we would be helping the environment and making our community a better place to live in. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+5b478a86aa0c,AE5D214AAC85,"One good reason why you should require is so we have a city that people could come and say ""wow what a helpful city this is!"" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d52c8e2c46a7,AE5D214AAC85,"We would be helping the city look nice, not only that it would bring more people to wanting to come to our city and live here and our population would grow! our people say ""Keep Austin Clean!"" and if we can make every kid do community service to help clean the city, we could have and keep Austin the cleanest city in the United States. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c163df315e13,AE5D214AAC85,"Another good reason would be that we would be helping the environment, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0a561b08eac2,AE5D214AAC85,"the animal shelters would be nice and the animals would be good and not suffer, the air won't be polluted, fishes won't be dyeing from people throwing things in the water, and it would make our environment safe for us and the wild animals that live in our city. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+99254b628cfb,AE5D214AAC85,Another good reason that it would be good is that it would give us an advantage on our high school credits. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7e9cf20542e0,AE5D214AAC85,"we need the credits to pass high school, so why not start now and finish it before we graduate out of high school. in fact, in high school most of the kids get their credits by community service! so this would give us an advantage for next year and you would help us reach our goal to graduate in a few years ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d32b3f826fda,AE5D214AAC85,"I think you should require it, at least to the 8th graders, because we need to start taking more responsibility in everything we do, and we would be helping our city and the people and animals that live around us, and we would be helping the future people living in this city by keeping it clean for them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+28c0a746c72a,AE8CA585DC1F,There should be a change in the Electoral College ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ba8dfe4657be,AE8CA585DC1F,It should be changed to electing presidents by popular vote. It is our right to vote for someone who would actually make changes in our society and make our lives different ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fffacda8edcf,AE8CA585DC1F,"The fact that we have to vote electors for those electors to choose our president, it seems unfair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f3ba7821515,AE8CA585DC1F,"Also, the purpose of voting for president is for everybody to vote not just citizens. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a36f609d5e5,AE8CA585DC1F,"To continue, election of presidents by popular vote should be used in the United States. If we are voting for presidents, then why should us ,citizens, vote for electors in order for them to vote for our president? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d10b63acd9ae,AE8CA585DC1F,"As stated in source 2 ""The Indefinsible Electoral College"",""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state,candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing""states."" In addition, it states in source 3 ""In defense of the Electoral College"","" No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd26f907ce45,AE8CA585DC1F,"This shows that with the Electoral College, not every region is going to have electoral votes. Therefore, it would not be fair for those regions. Perhaps their votes would not count and basically the chosen president would not pay attention to them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8155c5a3a0b7,AE8CA585DC1F,"Furthermore, everyone should be allowed to vote not just citizens ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5af05fa02e83,AE8CA585DC1F,"The fact that not everybody are qualified citizens to vote, then the amount of votes would be vague. This process is similar to not having enough electoral votes. The votes would not be popular or in a great amount for that specific place. For example, as it mentions in source 3, ""Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-to really listen to the competing candidates-knowing that they are going to decide the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average..."" There should not be any thoughtful voters deciding on the election. It makes it unfair for those who want to vote but are not allowed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1181b1219c17,AE8CA585DC1F,"On the other hand, Electoral College could have benifits ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8b8296415150,AE8CA585DC1F,"In this process it is easier for the electors who are voting. If there is a tie in votes, then they can pass it on to the House of Representatives in which state delegations take care of the voting. At least with this process, they have their own system set up and if any problems, they know in what way it can be fixed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ce3f30948eca,AE8CA585DC1F,"Unlike voting by popular vote, it can cause some problems because not everyone is allowed to vote and there could be few votes for candidates which would have a negative outcome. However, it would be the same for the Electoral College because there would be not enough electors in regions. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c26a7f3ef902,AE8CA585DC1F,"In conclusion, election by popular vote for the president of the United States should be used. It could change society and it will allow us to have a better living. This could give us a chance to vote and feel part of the election. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9e57e33651e7,AEBBFD25000D,I would like to say that I support the option to use cell phones during free time throughout the school day. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3e13bbab7527,AEBBFD25000D,Students need a way to communicate with out making too much noise. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25c5e3da2208,AEBBFD25000D,Using cell phones between class allows students to communicate with their friends even if they are across the school. It also allows them to contact their family if it is necessary. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27c93ff3c8e2,AEBBFD25000D,Using there phones between classes will also help keep students happy and the happier the student is the more likely they are to focus. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0908a510e392,AEBBFD25000D,"Even if students were not allowed to bring cell phones to school, they would anyway and then they would use them in class. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+25fc821d935b,AEBBFD25000D,This just cause more students to get in trouble then necessary. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+358dd7897220,AEBBFD25000D,"If you do make the rule that students cannot bring cell phones at least consider keeping record of how may times each student has been caught with their cell phone and make it a set number of times they can be caught with it until they are severely punished( at least once). 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3b989f4c84fb,AEBBFD25000D,"I hope that you will take my thoughts on the matter under concern, and if you do ban cell phones I understand. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+67f0c56e046b,AECB1177BDC1,i think that the Electoral College should not be able to elect the president. I think it should be a coice of the people. ,Position,Effective,,,
+2b7fda204ac3,AECB1177BDC1,when you go to vote you actually are voting to pick the electors when you vote for the president each state has electors so you help pick the electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3427d35c79d2,AECB1177BDC1,When people vote they are voting for presidents not the electoral college its not right to have a electoral college. Because it should be the peoples choice ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14e27e8fef79,AECB1177BDC1,"(In source 2) Even presidents want to get rid of the electoral college that is saying something. People would rather have a direct election then the kind we have now and I agree. See when the people are voting for electors they dont know what that elector is going to vote for they can only hope for what he is going to vote for. (source 2) Paragraph 13 ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+68d1bc982199,AECB1177BDC1,"the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. i think that the electoral college should be abolished. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34b08d001f5f,AECB1177BDC1,Who knows maybe some of the presidents woukd have been different because the electoral college could have changed some peoples votes. Say some wanted Obama not to be president but the state elector picked him that could be a game changer. It is suppose to be a democracy the people make the choices this is not a dictatorship. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d10817c75f3,AECB1177BDC1,What if the state all voted for one president then the electoral college voted for the other that would throw off everything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e93239c1e0e,AECB1177BDC1,There would probably be riots to be honest. This is making our country sound like a dictatorship. We the people of the United States of America deserve to pick our leaders. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc5e514ad9d3,AECB1177BDC1,But say if you were part of the electoral college you would like this situation. So put yourself in their shoes would you like it or not. Of course you would you hold the power of picking the president. Its honestly probably the most stressful job in the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bd2d7cd4c0d,AECB1177BDC1,"See if we had a vote to see if we should have to electoral college i think alot of people would vote no. I dont see why we cant have this vote as a country then there wouldnt be a topic to argue about. The electoral college is a decision that was not in the constitution i believe so it can be removed very easily. My opinion is that we take the electoral college out because it is causing nothing but arguing. We deserve to pick if we want to have a president we want or not. We deserve this power atleast, we dont have any power as regular people we deserve this. They shouldnt have the right to take this away from us ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d52b362b53a7,AF0BC75F4DBC,I am arguing to change the ways of the Electoral College vote. I think the popular vote is a great way for us to express our own opinions. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9f448c9d0163,AF0BC75F4DBC,"where as on the other hand there is only a small group deciding, which isnt fair, we should have our own say too ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+21bbf8f430c9,AF0BC75F4DBC,"Afterall, he is going to be our president not just the 538 electors. ""Its official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational,"" says Bradford Plumer. some people may wander whats wrong with the electoral college? why isnt that a good idea? well in source two of mine it says ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electorors, who in turn elect the president."" its also stated that ""at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states.""    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6e8fb2630c4b,AF1C86BFDC2D,I think that we should change the voting system from the Electoral college to the most popular vote. ,Position,Effective,,,
+e9c239023463,AF1C86BFDC2D,The first reason is that it is unfair to voters and presidential nominees. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+098cd66a679c,AF1C86BFDC2D,"If the voters can not get there votes in to the nominee that they want then how do the votes go to the right elector. For example,the winner take all system,presidential nominees go to the states that they know they have a chance of getting there votes from. A few states never saw a campaign ad such as Rhode island and south Carolina,voters from 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19b200ad07ba,AF1C86BFDC2D,"The second reason is that most voters only vote if they they like him or her on the way he or she dresses,talks,looks like,race,etc ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8528fb182b3,AF1C86BFDC2D,"Real voters now what they are doing and know who is really better for the country on his or hers facts and statistics. Some people just don't know who they should really vote for but that's what makes the country bad off. For example,people could vote for a president who says to lower minimum wage so so the higher paid people get paid more but he or she don't tell you about cutting down the minimum wage to $5.00 and then the people who voted for the good nominee and get paid minimum wage are now getting paid less but really the other nominee is the good one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f180eff595e,AF1C86BFDC2D,"The third reason is that even Richard Nixon,Jimmy carter,Bob Dole,the U.S. Chamber of commerce,and the AFL-CIO all agreed on abolishing the electoral system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c1f0891d0e7,AF1C86BFDC2D,Almost every one has agreed on abolishing the electoral system. But there needs to be more people with higher grounds and words to abolish the system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f87e7082315c,AF1C86BFDC2D,"In conclusion the electoral college has no really good side to it. Its unfair,outdated and irrational. Almost everyone says to get rid of it. If you want it gone your gonna have talk to someone of high authority.              ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f5fa770b239a,AF5C9DA63FB1,the electoral college is pretty bad. you should make the vote go by poplar demand instead of electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40c8eeea6b7b,AF5C9DA63FB1,one reason is because many people diont understand how it works thus more inclinded not to vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d88396dcedfe,AF5C9DA63FB1,"everyday pelple want to know whats going on in their government and you erase the fact and make them think the electoral college is the answer. you have to go back to making popluar vote a thing, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+97c316f77287,AF5C9DA63FB1,once in a while ytheir are times when popluar vote wins but electoral loses ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+900c0717cc5b,AF5C9DA63FB1,this is bad becuase many people like it more but only a few electors  care about really voting. whkle everyone really wants to win others dont reqally know. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+24f4a8db1033,AF5C9DA63FB1,you alsol need tol think of all the familys that need to understadn what the electoral college is. it is a much harder and complex method thna popluar vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60c442980146,AF5C9DA63FB1,another reaspon is the complexity of the big states vs. small states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91f2a95b2008,AF5C9DA63FB1,when they are bigger and they have lees things than when they are bigger. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05c6c9d39f1c,AF5C9DA63FB1,but thats what people who wouldd be voting =for the electoral college would say. they need to be much more carefluol in the way the orgaize their thinking and the way that they controilmathe ranking of stsate vs popluation vs electorla college for these reasons here i think that we should make the elcetorla collger iilleagla and punishable by death. we should switch the the polpuar vote . it would be muich betetr to make it that way and people will eb much more inclined to vote. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1e3b2330f1b1,AF6EA8391841,I think my principle should required some of my friends should perform community service because they need to learn what mistake's they've done. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eab86c3d78b8,AF6EA8391841,"One reason why i think my principle should required community service is, some people might not want to tutor at a elementary school because they don't like kids ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+14db75c44360,AF6EA8391841,It would be better for them to tutor because in the end they might have a chance to like kids and help them out. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b2616549237,AF6EA8391841,"Another reason is, most of them would not want to be picking up litter ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+082736db5adf,AF6EA8391841,but it would be good for them to learn their consequences. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4088f9b1eec2,AF6EA8391841,"My last reason is, They should learn that it's not always easy in life to do what ever they want; ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a71b0872eb1,AF6EA8391841,it doesn't matter if its taking up space in their time. There are to many crazy people out in this world and we can't let them go thinking that what ever they've done is ok. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8bb90ec16a99,AF6EA8391841,"In conclusion, People must learn that what their doing might not get them far in life. It could be better for them and have a chance of making a good life. That is why my principle should required community service. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9b80620bcc8e,AF90C62BA52D,I say yes that kids should have to do some community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dfb079aa8d7c,AF90C62BA52D,I think this because most kids these days are lazy and don't ever go out side to work ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b17aac864352,AF90C62BA52D,"it will give them an advantage at what work will look like when there older, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bb8982dda5b,AF90C62BA52D,and they will also be able to see what kind of job fits them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd3e7fd7fb34,AF90C62BA52D,"Most kid these days are usually inside playing xbox, play station or sitting on there couch eating crap like chips. I have a neighbor who never goes outside he's always inside playing video games or watching tv. When kids do this they aren't getting anywhere in there life. When they go to get there first job the people will ask them if they have any experience and they will say no and then they will never get a job. See and their life is just going to rot away ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99d27afa9d79,AF90C62BA52D,This is the first reason why kids should do community service. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+affb930e73fb,AF90C62BA52D,Next they will have a look on what jobs are going to be like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4ac2073b162,AF90C62BA52D,"Like if there are hard, to easy, to much, not enough. I work a lot with my dad he has a landscaping business and i have two horse that I have to take care of and work. I think landscaping would be to hard for me but i like to help out so i go and learn new things all most every time. And with my horses they are a lot of work they have me running around getting stuff that i need for them all the time like hay grain treats. So getting kids out on a job will show them what the real world is like and how scary and hard it can be. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+811fc451e468,AF90C62BA52D,Finally kids will be able to see what job fits them the most ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a30abfad363c,AF90C62BA52D,Like a physically working job or sitting in a chair all day answering phone calls. I like being outside the most so i would like not to be in a chair all day just like school. I know some kids who have know clue what they want to be because they don't get showen enough what jobs are like in real life. If you are a video game freak when you do community service why don't you help little kids out playing them or something. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c170cd7eac2e,AF90C62BA52D,"Ask you can see that doing community service as a kid, will give you a lot of benefits and more choices as what you would want to do when you are older.
+
+Again it will help the lazy kids that do nothing all day, give kids advantages, and finally see what kind of job they will be good at. Get off your couch and help out the community now! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7d37de36acd4,AFBEA4BA2D3C,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" The author stated both positive and negative stances on the topic of driverless cars. This topic is very controversial when bringing in the aspect of safety and the well-being of others around the driverless car. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+866acf7fc97d,AFBEA4BA2D3C,I believe driverless cars are not a good idea to bring into society. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ba2d9b5f9be5,AFBEA4BA2D3C,driverless cars would not be a good idea to implement into society because drivers could get reckless at the wheel. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c7c53be76969,AFBEA4BA2D3C,"In the text it stated that ""None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents"" meaning that at some point the driver would have to help the car navigate at times when the car couldn't(7). Which imposes that the drivers would have to be aware of his/her surroundings at all time when the time was needed for them to take the wheel again. But, doesn't that defeat the purpose of the car being driverless. No one would want a driverless car that still needs to be driven? ""Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive""(8). And the most important question is, what would drivers do to pass the time when they're not driving. They could distract theirselves with their phones, music or any passengers which could cause them to miss out on any important message from the car telling them to drive or take over in the needed situation. This is where the reckless aspect of the driverless car comes in. Missing the important message could cause accidents and harm to other drivers or pedestrians. And, this cause of harm to others around leads to my next argument against driverless cars and that is lawsuits. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dd97f9cad831,AFBEA4BA2D3C,driverless cars would not be a good idea to implement into society because of who would be to blame if accidents did happen. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+528bd97aa622,AFBEA4BA2D3C,"In the text it explained how new laws would have to be created to go along with the cars when they are proved to be ""more reliably safe""(9). But what would happen ""If the technology fails and someone is injured""(9). This issue could cause many lawsuits filed against innocent ""drivers"" and many lawsuits filed against companies who were not aware of the issue with the cars technology. Sometimes things happen and because technology can not be trusted 100% of the time these cars should not be able to exist. Lives could be on the line and many people who were not to blame will take the blame for this mishap. The car could just cause a million more problems instead of solving the laziness of humans will not to want to drive. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7e88448c78de,AFBEA4BA2D3C,driverless cars would not be a good idea to implement into society because of its proness to being hacked. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+26d7a380d220,AFBEA4BA2D3C,"Anything in the world could be hacked. Anyones phone can be hacked, computers can be hacked and even intelligence units can be hacked. So, if these things can be hacked then what makes one think that this driverless car can't be hacked. And, if hacked there would be no telling what the hacker could do to the car. For example, cause it to crash or lead the car into an area the driver in unfamiliar with because they're not paying attention. These examples could all cause harm to more than just the driver and that shows why this car should not be implemented into society, because it has various accounts on how it can misfunction. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c7d4d5c38fb,AFBEA4BA2D3C,"These examples of recklessness, misblaming and hacking all show why the idea of having driverless cars are not a good idea. They can mess up society and cause harm in more ways than it could help society. Although the car is a very unique way of showing advancement in the technological world, one would have tot look at both sides before concluding whether or not this is a good idea, and in this case it seems that the bad outweighs the good. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a01e713a5cc9,B000D7B81799,we must keep The Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+390380a0d715,B000D7B81799,"Why do we need to keep it? we need to keep it because it is an important process that our founding fathers created, that is part of our constitution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18b8c47fa0d1,B000D7B81799,"Also, it was established as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9eadb5305138,B000D7B81799,"The electoral college process deals with peoples selections of the electors. It consists of 538 electors and their has to 270 votes to elect the president. We have a president and vice president without having the electoral college, it would be useless to have all these senators. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2655565598a5,B000D7B81799,We have a house of representatives that work extremely hard and it would be rude to get rid of the electoral college and changing elections by popular vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+090b8d8d1319,B000D7B81799,"Leave everything the way its going because the process works awesome and if you mess something up your going to lose your job being the state senator, or your going to get many letters, emails, possibly phone calls of hatred and more. That will not be good for you or your business so my suggestion as a citizen is to not make any changes. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8b06cc83a700,B000D7B81799,Once a statement or rule is in the constitution you cant just take it away or change it that will ruin everything. I mean... its your decision on what you want to do but if I were you I would listen to my opinion strongly. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4879a4118013,B02A4DDA8FC7,I think all students should be required to do some community service. I think this because its a good thing to do. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+fd9e69c4d9b9,B02A4DDA8FC7,Helping elementary school kids with lets say math can really help them in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+53aadb7fa08f,B02A4DDA8FC7,"Maybe their parents didn't have a good education and they cant help them. That's where community service comes in, your helping a kid who needs help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08d95af75d3f,B02A4DDA8FC7,"Another example is helping out the elderly people, like carrying their grocery bags or helping them clean up their back yards ",Claim,Effective,,,
+af2f608c5a63,B02A4DDA8FC7,Helping the elderly can help them. Maybe their too weak to carry their own bags and they need help. A lot of elderly people now a days are dying because their trying to do chores they can't really do but they have to do because no one is their to help them do them. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7b604d3ead59,B02A4DDA8FC7,Cleaning up trash is also a good thing to do because your helping make our world a cleaner place. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+123e11cfe52c,B02A4DDA8FC7,Think about all the sea life that's died because they got tangles up in a trash bag and suffocated because people are too lazy to put their trash bags into their trash bags. If you clean up trash your saving and animals life and that's a good thing to do. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+838ecfef561d,B02A4DDA8FC7,Another reason why I think community service should be required is because it looks good on college applications. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6d22f7e86de8,B02A4DDA8FC7,"When you apply for a college their going to first consider a person who has had community service hour then someone who has no community service hours. They would consider a person with community service hour over someone who has no community service hour because that shows that they actually care about what's going on with the world. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+33ffa11a215b,B02A4DDA8FC7,Doing community service can also help you make some friends outside of your school. Also doing community service can help you as a person. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+179e47be7f5c,B02A4DDA8FC7,It can help you learn about how its a good thing to do and also spend some of your day outside in the fresh air. If one day your stuck at home and need something to do you should go outside and do some community service it makes your day less boring and you get to get out of your house for a little while and do something good. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+f59a5feb1b7b,B02AD8EE0DF0,I would keep it the same ,Position,Adequate,,,
+076c9dc4c022,B02AD8EE0DF0,because it would put more work on the poll workers because they would have to count all the votes for each president. If they miss a few votes the wrong person could be elected as president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9e4fa7157ec6,B02AD8EE0DF0,I would rather them keep it the same because its simple ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+57c6149b0a8f,B02AD8EE0DF0,faster to calculate ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e33c7746a553,B02AD8EE0DF0,"and easy to read. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+726a8ce95cdf,B02AD8EE0DF0,I say its simple because you just have to count the votes and make an elctoral vote and then if u have the most electoral votes for that state it mean that you won the vote in that state. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+635aabceda25,B02AD8EE0DF0,At the end it matters who has majority of the electoral votewhich is 270. It'sbasically the same as how much states you've won to see who will be elected as president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a476175eae6,B02AD8EE0DF0,I also think its faster to calculate because when you do electoral votes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+81897598187b,B02AD8EE0DF0,"you would see how many electoral votes yu have out of 538. The majority of electoral votes is 270 so, If you have majority of the 538 votes you will be elected. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+31f82cd7fb06,B02AD8EE0DF0,It's easier to read electoral votes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+61cd69f460a8,B02AD8EE0DF0,"because you are adding and subtracting only 538 people, but if you are counting from popular votes you would have to add up millions and billions of votes that would be miscounted. If it's miscounted the wrong person could be elected for president.            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2a70383c3a19,B0846915EE1A,I think they should go by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+404b999d7e1e,B0846915EE1A,beacuse it gives people a chance to vote for the right thing or what they think is right . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd7ebe1907ea,B0846915EE1A,"So thats a popular vote for kennedy would not have actually gone to kennedy .
+
+It happend in 2000, when gore had more popular votes than bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888.
+
+obama recevied 61.7 percent of the popular votes cast for him and romney .... Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538-is an even number, but it is highly unlikely ....
+
+nixon in 1986 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the elections .
+
+there  is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the vote cast;that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the electroral college, which invariably produces a clear winner....
+
+knowing their vote will have no effect ,they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote ...!       ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d2008b1e023,B0D5228E9FBD,I think you should keep the Electoral College because its a process that consist of the selection of the electors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a1552f11c7dc,B0D5228E9FBD," It has 538 electors so it gives many people a chance to run. I really like the idea of that i want you to keep using this process. Each candidate thats running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. You help choose your state's electors when you vote for president. Most states have a ""winner-take-all"". Maine and Nebraska have a variation of ""proportional representation"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b107d605276,B0D5228E9FBD,The popular vote doesnt work because when they did it they had one the popular vote but lost the presidency.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0019be2e111,B0D5228E9FBD,The popular vote winner could again lose the presidency but the electoral college still has is defenders. The popular vote can let peopel pick who they want but the electoral college chooses people for you to select from that they know and have a feeling would do a good job and be a good president. People can vote all over the world not knowing what that person is thinking about doing to this world. For all we know he or she could be thinking about destroying us and making a whole knew other part of a different world . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b9fe9b16f27c,B0D5228E9FBD,The Electoral College is widely regareded as an anachronism. but each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vte for he party's nominee. certainty of outcome is like percentage . the winner takes all basically.  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40e8b0be3328,B0ED18C04F15,"I read all these articles about some states having to vote for the president's electors. They say basically when your voting for a president, your voting for his/hers electors. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d68af29f91db,B0ED18C04F15,"My opinion is there should be no need for electors. It should be easy and not too complicated. A presdient, a vice president, and a secatary. No electors or nothing. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8376412fb72d,B0ED18C04F15,I think a president can do alot of his own work and think of ideas alone. If he need help than instead of us wasting our time with voting for people to give the presdient ideas and help him out. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c30c26da88b8,B0ED18C04F15,Well the President always say's God Bless America. Shouldn't the President be listening to the voices of his country. America ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4880cb5ba7a0,B0ED18C04F15,"Yes, I think the candidate with the most votes should win ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+34ee02d3810e,B0ED18C04F15,"But, If they say that their going to do something for our country than they need to keep their word. Make it a better place not for himslef but for everyone. For instance, Barack Obama. What's the need for this unessarcy work that he has done. America is loosing their mind and doesnt know what's going on. Why is he doing this? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8376457a44f6,B0ED18C04F15,The president is to make smart decent relevant choices. And if he listen to the voices of Americans than he would have lots of ideas lots! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e97d8b6b0f61,B0ED18C04F15,"Instead he listens to who? His electors. People complain saying to themselfs, Where does he come up with these ideas? Well if you payed close attention to the presidents background and know what he really wants to do than you would know why. Honestly to me I dont think the Electoral College should keep going its just a bunch of mess that just doesnt make sence ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f20859b974ed,B0ED18C04F15,"Elelctors dont matter to most American's. Take the electors and the Electoral College away we dont want something we dont need. All we need is a President, a Vice Presdient, and a Secatary. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4ad0ce5b95db,B111395C3C6E,I think it would be bad to have community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a031732e5fb,B111395C3C6E,I choose this reason because some kids never have time to do anything and making them do community service would just waist their time to have fun. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1739d2a7255d,B111395C3C6E,Plus what if some kids have after school activities and must go to them then they would get in trouble. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e8f5d53397f0,B111395C3C6E,That would cause a lot of trouble in the school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6f146845ee06,B111395C3C6E,If kids just went to community service everyday they would be tired when they got done causing kids to be lazy in the future and end up being overweight. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a049dca105c2,B111395C3C6E,Then they would end up not going to work and jobs wouldn't be getting done. If jobs didn't get done then we wouldn't have any new technology and we would slowly die out of the human race. No one wants that to happen do they? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c89810bf247,B111395C3C6E,If kids went to community service then their parents wouldn't really get to spend time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9077451e217d,B111395C3C6E,"the kids would be working after school and they would be too tired when they got done working that they would go straight to sleep when they got home. they wouldn't be able to spend time at them on the weekend because the kids would want to have the time they could to play without having to go to work. Then the parents would be sad because they never have any time with their kids and the family would slowly fall apart. That's another reason why community service is bad. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+39d2c812531b,B111395C3C6E,What I'm trying to say is that you should not tell students to do community service. You don't know what they have going on in their lives. They could be a professional basketball player. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ce6a70442b71,B119CD1A5145,I think that students should all have to do some community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f2c3930ea131,B119CD1A5145,"For example, if everyone did community service a lot of people will be helped. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5b9c5680cfbe,B119CD1A5145,They could go to shelters and help serve food or help pick up trash for the community. They could also go tutor elementary school children like they mentioned that some of the kids do that. It would make the people your helping very happy or proud of the community. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+008b0b124533,B119CD1A5145,Students should be required to do a certain amount of hours for community service before they graduate. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4d868590bc5d,B119CD1A5145,that way they get more real life examples as well. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7c51600ffdd,B119CD1A5145,Plus if you think you are too busy of a person to do community service pick a day when you don't have anything to do. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e2ff164d692a,B119CD1A5145,"Do community service for at least a couple hours it will make you and the people you helped happy and you will also feel better about yourself as well. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a58b365004cc,B119CD1A5145,"In conclusion, community service is one of the best things you can go do to get involved. More students and even people should start and do community service whenever they can. I think that everyone should help out at least a little because everyone can make a difference. community service is very important and everyone should have a part in it to make the world a better place to live on. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1aa412945a8f,B133FCABD0AF,The Face on Mars is just a landmark. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+389238b801ca,B133FCABD0AF,you can't believe anybody that has no evidence ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d96269ce281b,B133FCABD0AF,NASA won't even leak anything ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+be68bfe16180,B133FCABD0AF,if NASA will not tell anybody anything then everyone is just assuming. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9389c2d55b5c,B133FCABD0AF,You can't believe anybody that has no real evidence. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b67d06a54fdf,B133FCABD0AF,"In paragraph five it says that ""evidence that NASA would rather have."" That shows that NASA doesn't want to say to anybody that is assuming that this is created by aliens because they really want this to be confidential. People thing the face is evidence of life on Mars and the Face is bona fide so they are saying there has to be life on Mars. In reality they don't know what they are saying so they are assuming that this was created by aliens just to start talk and give people something to talk about. This is evidence of why you can't believe anything without true evidence. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de6548400e78,B133FCABD0AF,NASA won't even leak anything. Some people think that Face is bona fide and that shows there are aliens on Mars. Nobody knows is that is true because if you read the paragraph it says some people think and everyone is believing what people think. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bb06db4fc71a,B133FCABD0AF,"THe story has been around for about the Face on Mars and it's bween everywhere for about 25 years and after a while of the story people started to say things that are not real mixed in with real things and people have just been going around like that. This is evidence of why NASA won't leak anything so people do not know the truth. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8cb7a3645a1,B133FCABD0AF,"If NASA won't leak anything then everyone is just assumimg. ""The Face on Mars has starred in a hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years."" It has been in movies okay and they change it up a little bit to make it interesting and people think that is the true story. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b080c7e1ea37,B133FCABD0AF,"NASA wishes there was ancient civilization background on Mars so they know the full details. NASA doesn't even know the full story of the The Face, so how can people be for sure about anything. These are examples of why people are just assuming. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a10d809b56e,B133FCABD0AF,People think it is a face that aliens put on there. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1a69e411d664,B133FCABD0AF,So you are saying if I go out to the middle of the desert and see a face it camre from aliens. It is a natural landmark that came with the planet of Mars. NASA is not even telling people so no one even knows for sure anyways. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+01acd1104720,B133FCABD0AF,"You can't believe anybody that has no evidence, NASA won't even leak anything, and if NASA will not tell anybody anything then everyone is just assuming. This is why this is just a landmark. There is a lot of landmarks on earth and this is one of them on Mars. There is no evidence of any of this so don't believe what everybody says.              ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+43f0d2be883b,B1473F247979,NASA`s had send a spacecraft called Viking 1. Many of the people that were working on this were think it was something else ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6f925eab4913,B1473F247979,When it came out 1976 many peolpe think it was made by aliens. But on one know that it was ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+571d8cf47bbe,B1473F247979,So it be came an icon for the plant mars. Many people think it was aliens that made the face or hills that from the face on mars. 22 years later Mars Global surveyor had a spacecaft that was going aronud mars to the face but when they did they take the image. Many were happy to see other image. But it did not came a clear as they what it to be ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47c4be40ad2d,B1473F247979,i think it could be is that a rock may crash into mars and made the face ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38eacb48fb95,B1473F247979,But over time sand bulid over it gave what it look like in 1976. In the photograph you can see that it maybe face but you can see that it can be a hill. What are the black spot in the photograph that we see here. It could be that is that can be made on mars by wnich it from by.                                      ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f736ea2f10c1,B15AE8E4985E,"For centuries, we have followed a certian system estabolished by our founding fathers. This system is called the electoral college. This system is based off voting for the president through electoral votes rather than based off more popular. The state has an overall say through its electors ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ba893ef09c38,B15AE8E4985E,I believe that this system is unfair and should be abolished. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f5fc1ecc5e7,B15AE8E4985E,The electoral college should be abolished because you are not voiting directly for the president. You are voting for an elector who would in turn elect the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31d24893255f,B15AE8E4985E,"While you may end up pleased, others may feel the complete opposite ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a5e10f8e5f3b,B15AE8E4985E,I believe that it is unfair to not directly vote for the president bacuse it should be completly up to this nation to elect a president. The system they have set up right now is injustice ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+59c60010a20c,B15AE8E4985E,The second reason the electoral college should be taken away is that the system has much room for failure. Electors could easily betray the will of the people ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7ec5b65c3dc,B15AE8E4985E,"They have much more power than the standard voter. The electors would completly oppose the most ""popular"" vote and put in their vote for whoever they feel deserves it. This is wrong and totally goes against the idea of giving the people power. This would qualify as just giving a few people power. There could also be room for a tie. This could result in the elcetion ending in the hands of the House of Representatives where the state delegates could chose the president. Not only is this destorying the power of the general public but this could also result in people not getting what they wanted. The delegates cuold go completly against what the people say because they technially have the right to since they have the power of the situation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5389eadf88f1,B15AE8E4985E,The final reason the electoral college system should be left behind is the fact that not every state gets to see the canidates ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd773c80d19d,B15AE8E4985E,Some of the smaller states that don't count for much of the vote or tend to lean towards a different party don't even get a visit from the canidates. Not only is that unfair but it's also completly demaning towards the state. It makes the citizens of the state feel unworthy or not important enough for not even making an effort for their vote. This is also a stupid move on the canidates part because they might have been able to persuade the state's vote. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f4096d26886,B15AE8E4985E,"In conclusion, the electoral college is not a functional system for its characteristic of being completly indirect, for taking away the power of the people, and for its room for error. Although it may seem like a trustworthy system at first, don't be fooled. So whats more important, the power and opinions of the people or the power and opinion of the delegates?            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4d531185d19c,B15AF429027A,Student would like to benefit being able to attend classes at home. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+43bd0fde9052,B15AF429027A,Some teenager in high school are having a baby or had their baby. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+79d23d79dad1,B15AF429027A,Some teenager are better to work by their self to get it all done ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71d653c6b3f2,B15AF429027A,The dont need away getting nowhere if its online classes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2f59c5332c26,B15AF429027A,"
+Some teenager in high school are having a baby or had their baby, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9cdcccd4a31,B15AF429027A,"They dont have day care for their child. If you are a teenager with a newborn baby you dont want to leave your baby at home with your mom. You want to do a online class for you can take care your own kid, you can still do your school work and keep up with everyone in your class. Some teens dont have people by there side to call on and need help, so they try to help there self the best way they can to. Some day care cost to much and they dont have lot of money to pay for it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bdc9de9abb3,B15AF429027A,Some teenager are better to work by their self to get it all done. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a653bc558964,B15AF429027A,"Some student dont have to think anyone is coping there work for the other kids are getting the correct answer. They might not get along with there classmate so,They hate doing group work. He or She dont like doing group work because, They might be doing all the work by their self. Some kids like doing work in there own way because that how they're use to it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c67304f639f,B15AF429027A,The dont need away getting nowhere if there are online classes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9647062551ee,B15AF429027A,"Some teens dont like riding the bus or walking to school so, They will ask the mom or dad or who live in the house with them to take them to school. Sometimes kids get kick off the bus because of whatever they done so they have to ride with mom or dad. Teens dont have to think about if they have money to get some lunch when its food in there house. They dont have to think if a kid will take their food form the ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b97e85aad6cb,B165E46F2D0C,"When our great leaders died they're visions didn't die. They wanted the people to be in charge of who runs there country and what happens in them. Why is this not happening the way our founders wanted it. Having the Electoral College is not a bad idea but, its not a great one. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6bf8a1a70ed3,B165E46F2D0C,Demolishing the Electoral College is the only fair way. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+876d27373df6,B165E46F2D0C,"the Electoral College method of selectin the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carry their state....Knowing their vote will have no effect"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+93355615c458,B165E46F2D0C,"Popular vote don't seem to matter, The Peoples vote don't seem to matter. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+67ee81c761cf,B165E46F2D0C,Others may argue that the Electoral college helps break a tie ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3e724f7438d1,B165E46F2D0C,"but, that only happened one time. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+93c141b65beb,B165E46F2D0C,"If we ever had a issue like that again we could just enforce the Electoral College but, the people the say of who leads us after all we are one nation under god. In the article"" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" Bradford plumer states"" Voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" Furthermore he goes on to say ""  state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people."" Can't we just enforce the Electoral College when we need a tie breaker. The Electoral College consist of five-hundred thirty-eight electors which happens to be an even number. Even if its a slight chance couldn't an Electoral College voting happen to be a tie. The population doesn't have even or odds in this case because every year new people are getting to the age that  they can vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6453d25ea37a,B165E46F2D0C,"In the article ""what is the Electoral college?"" The Office of the Federal Register states that"" the founding fathers establish it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the presidentby a vote in congress and the election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f405d2116ec,B165E46F2D0C,"As you see it says a comprimise not total dictatorship. Everybody has rights voters rights are being tampered with. freedom to vote doesn't seem neccessary because we may have freedom to vote but our votes isn't making a difference. As Plumer said if there is a chance of a tie "" the election would be thrown to the house of representatives, where state delegations vote on the president....Because each state cast only one vote ,the single reprsentative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representative from California, who represent 35 million voters."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c19a54c90c9,B168CD238CA1,The Electoral College should be removed from our way of voting, we should change it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,
+8a0f40e96c13,B168CD238CA1,because state senators are voting for our president and not us . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c541b6b02ef7,B168CD238CA1,"As stated by Mr. Bradford Plumer in his article ""
+
+The Indefensive Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong
+
+"".
+
+"" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of elcetors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to cote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide elcetion, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes.""
+
+This claim tells how the president is choosen and its not by our votes its by the slate of electors votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f903aaa81eb5,B168CD238CA1,"Also,the Electoral College should be removed from our way of voting; we should change it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States because the electoral college is a disaster waiting to happen ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb06f6a4b541,B168CD238CA1,"Mr. Bradford Plumer states in his ""
+
+The Indefensive Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong.""
+
+""
+
+The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse.""
+
+The importance of this quote is because it tells us that there could be more disasters to come from the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73066d444f46,B168CD238CA1,The Electoral College should stay our way of voting because with it we avoid run-off elections ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ef21230a32e7,B168CD238CA1,"Mr. Richard A. Posner states in his article ""
+
+In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President""
+
+that we avoid run-off elections. ""
+
+The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent of plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electotal College (301 and 370 electoral votes, respectively).There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner....""
+
+The importance in the counterclaim is that it shows that the Electoral College process had a clear winner. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e9192ec1c1ee,B168CD238CA1,"Also, the Electoral College should stay our way of voting because of majority vote. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+484c1338823f,B168CD238CA1,"The Office of the Federal Register states in their article ""
+
+What is the Electoral College?""
+
+in the third paragraph. ""
+
+The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House od Representatives plus two for your Senators....""
+
+This quote shows how each state has so many electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ae883cc2782f,B168CD238CA1,"In conclusion, the Electoral College is both good and bad for our voting system. Some systems are wrong and some are right but its a hard decision to make with the Electoral College because its both wrong and right. We dont need no disasters in the voting system we already have enough disaters in the world that we live in. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6fc9423cdaad,B1A87B210C0F,We should keep the Electoral College but should change some of the rules. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a8a37ba8b048,B1A87B210C0F,We should have a Congress that knows best about what we should do to make our country better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39840d3e561f,B1A87B210C0F,They should be wise with age and should know better than to elect someone who is no good for this country. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b237b8d4e720,B1A87B210C0F,The votes should be runned by the people and they should have a say if the person running to be President or Vice President should run at all. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8a713a383db4,B1A87B210C0F,"The people have the majority vote, so they should be able to have a say. It does take longer but it is what's right. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+30e26532fb1d,B1A87B210C0F,We don't need to get rid of the Congress but we need to be better about who we put in the office to run our beautiful country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8e03b7d34af,B1A87B210C0F,"They need to come and show us who they really are. Visit a town and get them your vote. The Electoral College has done some good things in the past but we should change it. The Congress needs to be made up of people who know what is right and which canadite to choose as our President. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c238678394bc,B1A87B210C0F,"If you are going to be in Congress and are voting for a specific party, then you need to stay in that party. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4b78c09dc436,B1A87B210C0F,"The canadite is going to feel like you betrayed them after everything they have done for you. Just because your rich doesn't make it okay to betray what's right for this country. ""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)"" (In Defense of the Electoral College:Five reasons to keep our  despised method of choosing the President, Richard A. Posner). Through our troubled times, Congress has never stopped trying to make everything better. That is what this nation needs and hopes for. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e73ca7ed37c9,B1A87B210C0F,"Do not get rid of the Electoral College because it helps us who to choose to run our nation. Just make some adjustments and this country will be the best it can be. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2fa22fe79596,B1E87F6E9C5A,Electoral college is a unfar way to vote for a president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d498f7ae345a,B1E87F6E9C5A,it make the government officals bias to the more popular states such as Flordia or Texas. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8986eaaf64c,B1E87F6E9C5A,"I think that we should get rid of the electoral college because it make the smaller states feel left out compared to larger states. If the president was elected by the population not by the ""Government"" how would it change the way the U.S. worked today. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02f9f0c25c16,B1E87F6E9C5A,"The text informs me that under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors who in turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0b9ee6c0044,B1E87F6E9C5A,In my opinion I think that there should be more than 3 votes or 4 votes for a state to elect a president. If the United States went to a population voting system the elections would be more fair to people that live in the smaller states. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4d3f60c0373,B1E87F6E9C5A,"in 2000 the U.S. presidential race, Al Gore received more individual votes than George W. Bush nationwide, but Bush wont the election, receiving 271 electoral votes the Gore's 266. If the case of Gore losing the election a year later Bush went to war on Iraq. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99d6dd56a125,B1E87F6E9C5A,If the United States went to a population voting system the percentage of votes would increase dramaticly to cause a honest election. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8fede7ed0cd5,B1E87F6E9C5A,"If the election where to happen next election cycle I think that it would change the way the United States votes. People are fooled by the president when they say ""I will lower taxes, Protect the environment, or Stop the wars we are in"" I thnk that it's a trick for them to win the votes they need to win. If the population voted for the president i think that the United States would not be in debt. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30cef57f5d2f,B1E87F6E9C5A,The reason I think that the voting regulations is broken is that smaller states like Rhoad Island is a state that gets 3-10 votes and Claifonia gets 55 votes. If the only thing that make people happy is to be heard by the bigger people in life. If you where a 18 year old kid in a small state trying to make a  new product that could help millions but your in that state that wont let you be heard by the rest of the country.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3c63cf3e76fd,B1EBAAE6E651,"I believe we should change the election process. You should change it to an election of popular vote and give the people power to decide not on the electors for the candidates, but just on the candidates themselves. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+240edbbaaba9,B1EBAAE6E651,"It would be a much easier process, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0bef79eceb46,B1EBAAE6E651,"at the same time, a much less expensive way of electing presidents. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+61697b59d06b,B1EBAAE6E651,"There was a Gallup poll in 2000 that even states that 60% of the population of voters prefered a direct election instead of using the electoral college. That year, Al Gore won the popular vote, but, thanks to the electoral college, he lost the presidency. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f6703e926071,B1EBAAE6E651,the electoral college is an unreliable way to elect the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8c40ade4b68,B1EBAAE6E651,"the people can't know for sure who chose the electors. Anyone could have chosen them! 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bdf23f1ef46d,B1EBAAE6E651,This is why we should change the election process to an election of popular vote and  let the people decide on the candidates themselves. It would save money by not having so many people in the electoral college to pay and it would be a much easier and fair process.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+70d433fb7c89,B211B7A637A9,Changing the school policy to only letting students attend or play sports is good but bad at the same time ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+6354eb7374bf,B211B7A637A9,it can be good because you should keep up with your school work while your playing sports or other activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14bcfe3b0dcc,B211B7A637A9,That is the main reason why you are going to school. If you cannot somehow keep up with any of your school work and your getting D' s and F' s then you shouldn't be playing any sports or be in any activities for the week or that period of time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8065fb02cb6e,B211B7A637A9,But having as C average and not being able to play sports i think is unreasonable. So having that policy is a good thing. But it can be bad at a certain point because having to have at least a B average is kind of high ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c34645349bbb,B211B7A637A9,I think at least having a C average is pretty reasonable than having to have a B average. If the policy was having to have at least a B average to play any sports or other activities i wouldn't join any of them. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7552d77b8993,B237EA09433F,"The Declaration of Independence granted us the right to control our government. Thomas Jefferson once stated, ""When a nations government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the right of its people to abolish it and establish a new government."" After viewing the articles Source 1:""What Is the Electoral College?"" by the Office of the Federal register, Source 2: ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer, and  Source 3:""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"" by Richard A. Posner it seems clear that the Electoral Colleges have lessened the power of the people in our nation. With the Electoral College method of selecting our nations new president the people of our nation become less empowered, they may cast their vote but the choice of president is never truly theirs. The Electoral Colleges drive people away from voting because they see the election as if their vote will not matter. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bc8b0b03c25c,B237EA09433F,To further empower the citizens of the United States the Electoral Colleges should be abolished. ,Position,Effective,,,
+7de1ad2100af,B237EA09433F,"Throughout our nations history the majority vote has lost due to being outvoted when it comes to Electoral Colleges. Because of the majoity vote losing out to Electoral Colleges, people have come to believe their vote will not matter in the long run ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f39b2d9a8754,B237EA09433F,"In Source 2 Plumer declares, ""faithless electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate"". With this method of selection for our country's president, the vote is never certain. The slate of electors that the people essentially vote for may or may not stick to the original plan. This ties back into people losing hope that their vote will not matter because they trust the electors to vote their canidate into office, when the electors could go either way. Another key point is, the canidates may not campaign in states that have a lower number of electoral votes. In Source 1 the Office of the Federal Register also asserted, ""Most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate"". Due to the Electoral College system being based off population some states have more of a say than others. Whenever a state decides their votes for Electoral Colleges the state typically contributes every vote it has to one canidate. When this occurs the state's people may be misrepresented. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a446f3a370f,B237EA09433F,Electoral Colleges do not reflect the democratic style of government we have had for hundreds of years ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0a0d6584b60b,B237EA09433F,"In Source 3 Posner states, ""it is the electors who elect the president, not the people"". Ever since the United States has been around our lifestyle has been purely democratic. The people are supposed to the empowering body of our government and their voice is the one that should be heard. But since we have the Electoral College the voice of the people has become muffled. No longer is the presidential election a democratic event, but one that is decided through the votes of only a few chosen American citizens. Plumer observed in Source 2 that, ""During the 2000 campaign, 17 states didn't see the canidates at all"". If the people of America are truly part of our governing body then they must see the canidates and hear what they have to say. The Electoral College has driven canidates away from states that will not have much say. These states are then left to make a decision for themselves and decide based on their personal preference, they are never able to truly hear what these canidates may or may not have to offer. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+89dd4fe617da,B237EA09433F,"On the other hand, Electoral Colleges do have a lack of uncertainty ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2acb3fb90981,B237EA09433F,"As Posner said in Source 3, ""the dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible but it's less likey than a dispute over the popular vote"". The Electoral College provides the American people with a certainty of outcome. Whenever a state decides where its Electoral votes are going the canidate typically wins by a landslide electoral-vote victory. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d2cad724c126,B237EA09433F,"Although the Electoral College has a few appealing qualities, it is mostly an unfair system for the United States. The colleges should not have the power to decide the president, that should be the people that reside in the country's choice. Thomas Jefferson spoke of the people taking control of their country's government and the citizens of America should do just that if they are ever to escape the grasp of the Electoral Colleges ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+37723227da0d,B242BB046FED,"Driverless cars used to be just a dream. Now that we have the technology to make ""driverless cars"" there seem to be more and more of a concern as to how these cars could be completely driverless. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+aa8407e66bac,B242BB046FED,I am against driverless cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f6ce3c622ea6,B242BB046FED,"the cars aren't completely driverless, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+05e46f563397,B242BB046FED,"there will have to be new laws made for these vehicles, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+82ed54305ef9,B242BB046FED,there would be confusion for who to blame. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ab47fe2fdcc4,B242BB046FED,"In the article, the author gave examples as to how the cars were given features that'd make them seem driverless. There were, of course, radar features and motion sensors, but at the end of the day the author of the artilce said, ""..None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless."" Now of course they can still do the things needed to drive i. e. steer, speed up, and break, but there are still special sensors made to make sure that the driver still has their hands on the wheel. The author of the article then says, ""This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4016e6e43fbf,B242BB046FED,"In the ninth paragraph the author says, ""Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe...traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times."" This means that the laws now do not include anything regarding driverless cars, basically making them illegal to put on the road. Now they will have to go through a long process of making laws for these new types of cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab5fc023e2de,B242BB046FED,"In the ninth paragraph of the article, it says, ""...even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?"" There would be too much confusion for the lawmakers and everyone else if there was an accident because although the manufacturers made the car, there was still a driver in the driver's seat, so who is to blame? This would cause a lot of conflict in court cases if there were accidents and someone was to be sued. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6bd149132a05,B242BB046FED,"I am against driverless cars because the cars aren't completely driverless, there will have to be new laws made for these vehicles, and there would be confusion for who to blame. The idea of driverless cars is a great idea, indeed, but there would be just too much confusion and conflict regarding these. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b54d2c4ecf74,B25D365F5C1C,"electrol college is not just a college it is a process,  The electoral college is a process that consist of the selection of the electors,  it started in the founding fathers established in the constitution as a comprise between election of the president . this means that the electorol college should stay this college is more than just any old college its history ,its in the constitution this college should not be gone this college should be honored. these electorals mainly select the votes for the people in the white house like the president and vice predident. our state is entitled allotment of electors equals the nuimber of memebers in the congressional delegation  ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+37f2e0d9086d,B25D365F5C1C,i want electoral college to stay ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3af813f28200,B25D365F5C1C,they are good at things for the state ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+203eee0aa4eb,B25D365F5C1C,the electors college plays a big role in our state ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+55ddcf3ef858,B25D365F5C1C,"under the 23 amendment of the constitution , the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and a treated like a state for purpose of the electoral college . this means that because of the electoral college the district of columbia is treated like a state . so electoral college  is the reason why some districts are called a state why take this type of college away if this has such a big role in alot of things to do with the congress . with out the electoral college they wouldnt have presidents or any thing . in every election the electors are always there in every president election every president have their own group of electors behind them . they are joined by a canidates political party ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d644a3c5c896,B25D365F5C1C,"u may wonder how the electors work because all u do is see them behind the prsident well the process is hard and they want students who wants to be an elector to get ready on what they are about to get in to . it first start off by the u choosing the president when u choose the president u choose the group of electors this means when you choose the president the electors goes with him or her , most states have winner takes all system that awards all electors to the winng pesidental canidate's electors . after the election the govoner pepares a 'certificae of ascertainment'. this means that that it is listing all of the canidates who ran for president in your state along with names of their respective electors . the electors go through a long process . and the college wants the studentsa to know all the things they need to before they become electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9edf02071c8f,B25D365F5C1C,the electors deserve to have a college someone might want to be an elector ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3ea96073cfad,B25D365F5C1C,it wouldnt be anything with out electors they do more than just stand behind the president they do more they help the president the president we have today wouldnt be able to run for president without a group of electors . and they need a college for someone who wants to be an elector. this college should be honored to be in a program like that these electors are needed in our country with out electors we would have nothing if we didnt have electors the electoral college is widely know as an non democratic method of selecting a president that outa be by declaring the canidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b216e340bcae,B25D365F5C1C,these are all the reasons why we need the electors program . because they play in a big role of our country and dthey also good for our state and .l so we need these progems to show young student that being an elector is not easy itbis very hard and a long process and we need to show students how the experience is and they also need to be knowleged trained to do stuff that will make our country better . because if they mess up  on one little thing its an automatic fire for them . we need these colleges because it plays a big role and it reuires the votes. of the president meaining it helps the president win . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7eaeae486ab7,B27585EF3751,It has come to my attention the many problems that the Electoral College has. I would like to ask that we change to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+67b22aa9d1e1,B27585EF3751,"You see, not only is the Electoral College unfair, but it also creates a lie that tricks everyone into believeing that our President was the one that the majority of America voted for, when that is not always the case. ",Position,Effective,,,
+4769544389ee,B27585EF3751,"First off, the fact that the number of electors for each state relies on the number of members in it's Congressional delegation is just illogical. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b339efa902de,B27585EF3751,"lets say Florida has twenty because of its size, and California has fifty. if both states want to vote for someone different, then California is going to win only because of the size and population difference. So really, you aren't voting for the president...you're voting for the electors who will choose the president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d6f35008d199,B27585EF3751,An argument can be made against this...that the electors that you give your vote to will be trustworthy and vote for the person that your party wants. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8faccfd7bb66,B27585EF3751,"How does that give us a say though? For example, as it says in the article, Al Gore was the president that the majority of America voted for in 2000...he was the one that everyone wanted. Yet he lost the presidency because of this form of voting. This is a free country, or so we're told, so we need to be given the right of popular vote. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+9fe8c9d398fc,B27585EF3751,"Furthermore, the Electoral College system is flawed...there are millions of people in America and yet only 538 votes are counted ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b1d8347e67d8,B27585EF3751,"There is no way to be assured that the person you voted for, or anyone else, was selected. We need to ask ourselves what the best thing is for our country... letting everybody be dissapointed in who was voted for, or seeing that they got what they spent time on going and voting on. This isn't just a captain for a football team, or a manager at work. This is the president of the United States, and he or she will be running our country for 4 years or even longer, so we need to question this method of voting. We are a unified country, and our unity shows what we want as a country..we shouldn't have one thing chosen and get something completely different in return. The election by popular voting would be a better overall choice for our country. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+224acd4fd093,B27585EF3751,"All in all, arguments can be made both ways...for the Electoral College process or against it. The citizens of America deserve the very best person to lead them, and that's exactly who we should get...the one that America votes for. I know that there are more efficient and fair ways to do this, all we need to do is use them. At the end of the day though, using the election by popular vote would ensure that everyone would be 100% sure that their vote went for who they wanted, and that's what counts.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+45168f88dea8,B286EEAB83F6,I don't think students of any school should have to do community service if they don't want to. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+481b32ac5c3d,B286EEAB83F6,Community service takes a lot out of the day. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ef0dedb7013,B286EEAB83F6,"What if the students other things to do at home.
+
+Most students at our school play sports after school, and if they are playing spots how are they going to do community service? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f91b1735edca,B286EEAB83F6,"I know it is great to help out the community, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+34a83e9c9661,B286EEAB83F6,but we should be able to do it when we want to. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fab33a743f54,B286EEAB83F6,I understand that if a student have to have some kind of punishment and have to community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b8e1c6b32a2c,B286EEAB83F6,But I don't think we should have to pick up after other students they should pick up after themselves. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9ad4e4590ee2,B286EEAB83F6,What time does all of this starts? Because some students have to be at home at a certain time. And if we had to do it after we got home from playing sports it would be too dark to see how to do anything. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+05d41ff9283b,B286EEAB83F6,I know it is great to help your to but I really don't should have to do communit ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a08778827a79,B28B37BFCC03,"The students should be required perform community. This is because, the students will need to know about their community and what goes on. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2f26d69d492f,B28B37BFCC03,"This is also because, helping the community is important, it helps them deal with real-world problems ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+79ff730be7b6,B28B37BFCC03,help develop skills for them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d3aab0e38d2,B28B37BFCC03,"It they are the future, they need to have experiences outside of the school. They should help, so they can be the leaders of the future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb23b1a9dd16,B28B37BFCC03,"For example, doing community service by baby sitting, they will have experiences on taking care of their own child or children when they have them. With experiences at a young age, they will have known what it is like to take care of they child. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c2aa567d1d35,B28B37BFCC03,"Another example is if the student(s) do community service at a recycling factory, they learn about what is going on in the world and what is the amount of waste humans produce in their country or other counties. Which in turn will lead them to recycle more, which helps the environment and the animals who live there. The student could also have relatives at another country which the can tell them about the amount of waste produced there and what could happen to the world if they don't. Which leads to more recycling, and that helps the world. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1f79a9cac30a,B28B37BFCC03,for those who believe that community service is a waste of their time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+947717d8a302,B28B37BFCC03,"they don't think about others, they think only for themselves. And that can lead to a life of crime, with selfish desires for what others have. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b8e92efc739e,B28B37BFCC03,"For example, that person could want a necklace that another wants and they ask and the person says no, that person can feel negative desires for that person. That could lead to stealing the item itself, murdering the person and/or their family members, and/or robbing the store where the person got it from because they cannot afford the item ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9004eb1b8cde,B28B37BFCC03,"The reason people should have to perform community service are listed above. And also, this could lead to a terrible community in the future. And nobody would want that. They would want a tight community. And what a tight community needs is community service done. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e3487581ae2f,B29198FD0748,"It has recently come to my attetnion as I study our states voting system, that we as Americans do not have enough word in who we have as our leader. In a plethora amount of documents from the United States, and our Consitution it states all men are creted equal, when in all relaity we are allowing the Electoral College have more say in who our president rather than we do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+695c7053d14b,B29198FD0748,"Not only does the Electoral College have more say in our President, but it alllows the President to only go to states that they feel is nessisary to go to get the vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2dbcfde58452,B29198FD0748,"It also gives less say to the smaller states making the people there feel there vote doesnt count, allowing them to vote for any party. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+29e84c51e18f,B29198FD0748,"If we change our voting system we can vote for our leader rather than us voting for the slate of electors, and have the most popular leader of our country be our president. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+ad05fc5b4f34,B29198FD0748,The first reason i feel we should overthrow the Electoral College is becasue it is discriminating states votes based on there sizes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7d8fdb4f561d,B29198FD0748,"  In the article,""Does the Electoral College Work"", it states that becasue of the diffrent sizes of our states some people feel they do not get a fair say in who makes decisions for our country. They feel that because they dont live in a big state like Texas they do not have equal say in the decisions our country makes. In the article Plumer wrote, "" In the same vein, faithless electors have pccasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whoever they please..."". The Electoral College is changing peoples mind set on how to vote because they feel why should we care if the government does not, can you blame them? If we just took out the simple problem of the Electoral College more voters will vote honestly rather then go with everyone elses vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e0004b5963e,B29198FD0748,Another reason i feel we should favor the popular vothing system is because this would show that the soon to be presidents should vist all of there voters rather then the ones they know they will probably win. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b8f09e68370c,B29198FD0748,"""Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, canidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight race in the ""swing"" states."" What the author is saying here is the canidates dont give equal chances to the states to here what they,the canidates, have to say. For example if a democrate is going to states he would most likley avoid the ones full of republicans because he feels he has no chance and does not spend the money. But, if we get majority votes this will allow every indvividual to vote rather a group of republicans. Not only does this allow a better chance of winning for that democrate it allows the voters to feel like they can change there minds because they have a say. This will contribute to the conidates because they can now get there point across to more, rather then to select little groups. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a80acacc43d,B29198FD0748,The final reason we should get rid of this system is because at this point in time we are not even vothing for our presidents we are voting for people who vote for us. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd2f398ef41b,B29198FD0748,"What i mean is ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."" Americans have always wanted to be in power and have a say in what we do but in the case of voting we do not. By doing this we are allowing the government to make all of the decisions for us, as if we were children. When you turn to the legal age for vothing your vote should count. With this majority does not rule, for instance say our votes of 46 percent and 54 percent were to come in. The man of the 46 percent still has a chance of winning when the people had already voted. The problem with that is at that point the peoples word goes out the window, and the government once again jumps in demanding that they choose. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9cc7c076e5e5,B29198FD0748,"As we learn more about this topic we realize how rediculious this situation is. Obviously, going with popular vote is the best solution because we will finally be what everyone has been trying to do for decades, be equal. Sir, i hope you understand my årgument and really take into concideration what i have said. Our presidents make decisions for us everyday, dont you think its time me get to make one for ourselves? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fa987a1e7aa8,B2C131C2B3AB,"The electoral congress, made by the founding fathers for the people to vote for the President and Vice President. Also there is a process that consist in the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ""the office of the federal Register"". There are also issues with the idea of having the electoral congres becuase the voters get confuse and vote for the wrong candidate, but today those erros do not happen. The candidate is the person who is going to be the next President and Vice President. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c501d8b7b53f,B2C131C2B3AB,"To begin with, Having the electoral congress is a great idea, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f4ef0bfcca23,B2C131C2B3AB,it is an easy method of choosing the candidate that the people want to have for four years guiding taking care of the Precidency ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d02fc28962f7,B2C131C2B3AB,"and there are reasons of having the electoral congress, if you are part of the united states you can give your opinion and vote for the person that you think is going to the right one. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4c611a2afc35,B2C131C2B3AB,"Secondly, The electoral congress keeps the organization of counting the votes and declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes (The winner) ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e982beb05545,B2C131C2B3AB,"when you are voting for the cadidate you are voting for a slate of electors that were choosen by the congress, and the people will decide who they wanted to be their president and this is all about the people, and their opinion because they are the ones who vote for the candidate and they want him or her to be the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+efb6fdac1d92,B2C131C2B3AB,the congress has some erros ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f0392824ba84,B2C131C2B3AB,"but as time is pasing, it keeps getting better and having less issues because they have a modern techonology, thats now is taking care of the votes and keeping it orgainze. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6d076821a23a,B2C131C2B3AB,"In conclusion, many people today prefer and thank to the founding fathers of creating the electoral congress becuase is way more better. every one who is part of the united states can vote for the candidate that they want. the electoral congress was a great idea and everyone enjoys it becuase they are the ones who give their opinion to the congress and choose the candidate that they want to have for four years, giving benefits to the united states and there is a perfect example of our current precident who is doing a great job taking care of the united states. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e66b26ddf348,B2E85A9A8F9C,Was the Face on Mars created by aliens? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5151f5dc8678,B2E85A9A8F9C,"No,The Face on Mars is just a natural lanform ",Position,Adequate,,,
+39a88d2d7b7e,B2E85A9A8F9C,"because scientist figured it out that it was just another Martian mesa, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9fbbd2522058,B2E85A9A8F9C,the rule of thumb ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0508aff3dd2e,B2E85A9A8F9C,Micheal Malin and his team snapped a picture of the Face revealing a natural landform. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ff4a3c29aa9,B2E85A9A8F9C,"First in paragraph one and three, The region where the face was found is called Cydonia and ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5a910dc1b35,B2E85A9A8F9C,"scientists had also found that it just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad46a63d8b1c,B2E85A9A8F9C,"Next in paragraph eleven, Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, explained that ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times than the pixel size, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69e03d61e802,B2E85A9A8F9C,"so if there were objects in the this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks, you can see what they were!' ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60b3c80f7b46,B2E85A9A8F9C,"Finally in paragraph seven, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photo. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3ef5c60c396,B2E85A9A8F9C,"Thousands of web surfers waiting when the image first appeared on a JLP web site,revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4136e0c599f,B2E85A9A8F9C,"In conclusion, the Face was not created by ailens ,but just a natural landform because scientists have figured out that a mesa is a common lanform, the rule of thumb, and MOC team snapped a picture of the Face revealing a natural landform. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f3515a75ef76,B2EE7ADD5BFA,I have done research ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a1b9f0997a07,B2EE7ADD5BFA,I would like to change the Electoral College to the popular vote for the President of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3d08f43fadf8,B2EE7ADD5BFA,"Source 1: ""What is electoral College?"" explains that ""each canadate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors."" Many people do not know what that really means. It means that the people of the United States do not actually vote for who their president will be. They are voting for someone who gets to choose who the president will be. Having the Electoral College is very confusing ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2cba12f5c5b,B2EE7ADD5BFA,I think it is more fair to have the people of the United States vote directly for their president instead of voting for a slate of electios that then choose the president. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+902405c62a88,B2EE7ADD5BFA,"By getting rid of the Electoral College, the vote for the United States president will be more fair. We, the people of the United States, would not be voting for a slate of electors. We would actually be voting for who we want to become our president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58897b0eac70,B2EE7ADD5BFA,"These votes would be more direct and accurate. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+166cab3b58d8,B2EE7ADD5BFA,"Source 2: ""Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" states that voters may get confused and vote for someone that they didnt want to vote for. The people should be the ones voting for their president. It is unfair that only the electors get to vote in the end. Voters of the electors cannot even control who the electors vote for. The people have to put their trust in the electors to vote for the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb4fb3d8d44c,B2EE7ADD5BFA,It make smore sense for the people to have a say and for them to have the ability to vote directly. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c70040159506,B2EE7ADD5BFA,"When I turn eighteen and I am allowed to vote, I hope that my vote actually matters. I hope that my vote does not just go towards an elector. I hope that my vote will count towards whom I think will represent our country well. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1d4af1685266,B2F69B97BC2A,"I think that every person who wants to go for president should go to electoral school, just so when ever the person runs for president they don't win because they are well known and popular vs the other person who is not well known. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+3dc7013700f6,B2F69B97BC2A,"Also if they do go to election school they could learn how to run for pesident and learn how to write speeches, and also teach them that some of the 50 states in the united states have to have his/her vote.
+
+The out come of a person running for president that went to electoral school their electoral vote will be above average for one year and if they do good as president then the outcome for next year will maybe bet higher or lower. When ever a US citizen votes they are also voting for the electors canidates. and when you do vote that person who is running for president that helps his/her's group get elected. Every president has to have a Vice president.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f279bb1a43e,B30F7524C444,"I think we shouldn't have our phones during school hours. I think we should be aloud to use it after school or before school, but once you enter the school there should be a policy for NO CELL PHONES ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3299bb7796fc,B30F7524C444,"For example, what if your taking a district test or some kind of important test to get you to the next level and people are secretly texting the answers through there phone and sending it to their friends. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+29288d89d548,B30F7524C444,"If a teacher saw that, it would be an automatic zero and a call home from their parents. But if the teacher didn't see that, then a kid taking the test might have gotten a higher score then failing the test. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f702d4308fc9,B30F7524C444,"For more reasons, lets say your a teacher and one of your students get a phone call during class ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b3fbe9a2a59,B30F7524C444,"would you like it while he/she doesn't even bother listening to you teach, while the other kids want to learn? I THINK NOT! These are more reasons why other schools abandon having cell phone privileges. I'm not saying take away the cell phone if the student is not using it and just has it in their pocket for just incase. I'm saying if you see a student using it during school hours. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ff4d2af3e23e,B30F7524C444,Therefore my vote is to not have any cell phone privileges on campus. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+94755ba16a9d,B321A3B98AB5,They should change it to election by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e11f70b99278,B321A3B98AB5,the electoral college is not divided evenly through out the states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3575c43f5ee,B321A3B98AB5,So the president can win for having more states vote for him or her. The number of people in the state shouldn't count as how many votes they get. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+42ce99ad8075,B321A3B98AB5,"Like it says in the artcle ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"" paragraph 21 number 4 that ""a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does. . . ."". So its unfair to the smaller states just because of the size all the states should have equal numder of votes. People might say like in the artcle ""The indefensible Electoral College:Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" in paragraph 13 that the ""candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae39c5d714e6,B321A3B98AB5,Thats why all the states should have the same number of votes so the candidates would go there to try to win them over ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e174bca401c,B321A3B98AB5,Having popular vote help voters want to vote again ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f593ecd8f3f4,B321A3B98AB5,"Like in the artcle ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President."" ""The electoral college method of selecting the president College  method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+307a0daacbff,B321A3B98AB5,So thats why it should be changed to popular vote. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c434ecf07c27,B3249050C067,"The Electoral College was a compromise made by our founding fathers. It was made as a compromise between the election of a president through a vote from Congress and election through popular vote. The downside to this way of election is that the voters are not voting for one of the candidates but for their state electors, who then vote for the president. The votes from each of the states electors then count as votes for the candidate ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d44d49ffceb2,B3249050C067,This way of election for a president is unfair and confusing and should be changed. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b3abf32934fe,B3249050C067,"First off, the Electoral College is unfair in the way that a vote from an individual does not really count because the only votes that really count are the ones from the Electoral College. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+950cb05a138b,B3249050C067,"It is also unfair that the voters cannot always choose who they want thier electors to be. There are also voters who have no hope just because of the state they live in, such as Democrars in Texas or Republicans in California. Since they know that thier vote doesnt matter in a state whose majority of the population goes fot the opposing party. Thsi is one reason why individual votes are more reasonable and fair. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b181c9de2fb1,B3249050C067,"Secondly, the Electoral College is very confusing for a voter who doesnt know how it works.   ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f087ad44e5e7,B3526897360F,I think students at this school should have to be able to put on a community service task. It would be helping the school and the community a lot. The world has been very dirty from people littering and not caring about the environment around them ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7d45ad39ba33,B3526897360F,"if we got everyone in our school to help by cleaning up parks, recycle and also get other people they know like friends and family to help out in the cause, it would help this planet so much. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+84d4aeedee8d,B3526897360F,You could have them do it during school hours so they wouldn't think that they are using up their free time after school. A lot more kids would help if it was a project in school and making it credit or no credit ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5b89b1ff5fb1,B3526897360F,Doing service hours is very good because it helps other but also helps you by being a better person. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0eb10ccdd89d,B3526897360F,If everyone just did one community service this world would be a step closer to being a lot better. Each year goes by and the world gets worse for the animals in nature and for us ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e7a7ef98b1b,B3526897360F,"You could also congratulate the students by giving them a pizza party, jeans day, or even homework passes if they participate in a service. This would teach students how to be a good citizen of the America and also how to help this planet. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a215ba94e398,B3526897360F,f nature is killed by our littering that means we are losing ways to find cures for diseases ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66233dfbd83b,B3526897360F,I think this could help this school a lot and make kids feel a lot better about themselves. the teachers cold get the kids to go down to lower grades and have them help the younger kids in school and talk to them about how its like in the next couple of years ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+48c629a6685e,B365484CCA8F,beleve or not belive e- some people tend to base things on opinions instead of real facts like how people might say ' well how can you be so sure that aliens didn't make the face ' my rebundal would be 'the image first apperared on jpl website revealing ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c848dd7847ba,B365484CCA8F,"a natural landform there was no landform . there was no alien monument after all. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+5860a0f14197,B365484CCA8F,i can connect this by simply looking at the picture and back couple years and to now how scientist reported no life for is on mars you will be boiled to death because it's also no oxygen so how can an alien create a face when no life form have been found yet. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a185a1cae1f,B365484CCA8F,in concluision i want to to say dont always go with assuptions they never always go the way you planned and also dont belive a tall tell ask the person if they have real science based facts if they check out then believe or not belive. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+763e99b0a63a,B36C72D38CBC,Now you may have heard of something on Mars that looked like a huge rock formation. You may have thought it was created by aliens ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b68704a4994e,B36C72D38CBC,"I am here to tell you that it's just a mesa. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+d3a8c1f9b759,B36C72D38CBC,"in 1976 we discovered something on Mars that looked like a face! At first we thought it was something like what you think now, we thought it was aliens ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a743449a6a88,B36C72D38CBC,"The excitement was short lived for us because we ended up saying that ""Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa"" so that made it disappointing for us. You may say that the landform is created by aliens and we're just hiding it from you, but you're sorely mistaken because this discovery would help NASA as a whole if we did reveal it. That's just one of many reasons that we aren't lying about it being a landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+542084e0ca6a,B36C72D38CBC,Another reason that we are completely sure it's a landform is because we can't spot any sign of life on the face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2f884ef83a20,B36C72D38CBC,"As we said ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,"" ""So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f814962335fe,B36C72D38CBC,"So even if you thought we were lying saying ""Oh this image is a lie they have secret ones that actually show that there's life on Mars in their building, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+33bb35764962,B36C72D38CBC,you would have no clue that there's no reason for us to hide life being on Mars ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ac2877be140e,B36C72D38CBC,We wouldn't have anything bad happen to us because we discovered life on Mars we would get rewarded for discovering life on Mars so why would we hide it? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4346ddbf7469,B36C72D38CBC,And the last reason is that we have factual evidence and credibility to back up that there's no life on Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14038bcf24e0,B36C72D38CBC,"Like we said during this speech we said that ""And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform."" Later on we did it again in the speech ""Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. ""We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,"" Said Garving. ""Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution."" ""Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."" Now you may say that we never did that, but we have photographic evidence of that clear photo that lets you see everything on the face. So we have the evidence we need to prove that this photo is real. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+49081f209e37,B36C72D38CBC,"All together we have the proof that this special land formation on Mars that may look like aliens have built it, but it's just a simple mesa here on Earth something so common. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eba30750af83,B37483011EC6,I think as a citizen that we should keep the Electoral College going. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d3125aa4b4bd,B37483011EC6,is keeping us in the right track ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89142b3245b9,B37483011EC6,"There are many reasons is to why we should keep the Electoral College up and running. My personal opinion is that if we don't keep the way it is going, things will become wrong. I have many concerns that i'm going to be sharing with you. Hopefully you will understand.
+
+First, Electoral College has 538 people in the congress working to count the votes that people make. The most votes a President can get up too for winning is 270 Electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5cadd89899d2,B37483011EC6,Us citixen's help choose the state's elector when we vote for the President because. When we vote for the candidate were are voting for the candidate's elector. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+df1d7dd95d4d,B37483011EC6,this is fair because if we just had people by popular vote it would be a crazy mess. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6e2acf55611e,B37483011EC6,"We wouldn't really look at the qualities each President has or whom ever we may be voting for. Voting is a very serious thing and letting it be done by popular would be making the wrong choice. The Electoral College is voting for President of the United States and, the candidate of who will be Vice President with him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e700cfb7493,B37483011EC6,"Second, December is when we find out which electoral will be running our state. Goes for each and individual state. The ""Certificate of Ascertainmet"" list all of our candidates running. Then they will announce it on the year of election in December. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+543e2c792ecc,B37483011EC6,This makes things go on a simple flow. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1a72daccefcb,B37483011EC6,Like i said if we just have a popular voting going around it doesn't make it fair for the Candidates running. We vote for the Slate of electors who then go an vote for President. I think this is right because some people don't understand political things and make the wrong choice of President. If we have people who are in the government and know how to be a good congress we should trust them to make the United States a well place to be. No one is ever going to have which ever Elector they want. Some people may just vote for one of the candidates because their bestfriend voted for him or her. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+394f06f755d5,B37483011EC6,"If we have people that have more knowlodge then us then, we can have a good President. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97400ac79f80,B37483011EC6,"If we just based it off what we might know and not know. We could be putting are self as American Citizen's in a bad place. If there was to be a tie then we still have someone with more knowlodge then us to back us up. The House of Representatives where they will vote for President. This is usually on rare occasions, but if it were to happen we would have no worries. Some people vote to just vote and don't really know what there voting for or what that person might do for us. Some people may vote because of what race, what they look like, anything really. I think if we keep the Electoral College it will keep us good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1085c0e6cd5,B37483011EC6,"What i'm really trying to explain is that. The President should be choosen correctly and wisely. Some people aren't very educated in politics and, we don't want just votes beacause we can vote. We want the votes to mean i know this person, i know he or she can do the job. I know this person is capable of being our President. In the end i honestly feel the Electoral College will work for now any to many years that will past. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+453cd8840f97,B374D93D2A76,Have you ever thought about keeping the Elector College or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United State? As living here in Florida most people advise to go with the Electoral College because the Electoral College always finds a way to make at least all the votes to be equal. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6f22f0697c4b,B374D93D2A76,electing by the Elector College is way better than voting by the popular vote inthe United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+db0a9dd093ac,B374D93D2A76,the Electoral College actually tries to even itout with everyine's votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+756cb574b7bb,B374D93D2A76,"For example, in the passage
+
+What Is An Electoral College?
+
+by the Office of the Federal Register it states that "" The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.."" This means that most states have a ""winner-take-all"" for the winning candidate's. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7d1ba663b6ee,B374D93D2A76,"if we vote by the most popular vote on president, then that means the one who gets the most popular vote might have a group of his electors and cheat off by that ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0c8a0b72b303,B374D93D2A76,"In conclusion, the Elector College is why better then picking by the most popular vote for president.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+35e060188e48,B3948CC26153,I believe that we should keep Electoral Colleges but massive changes to the system. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+40b74279249f,B3948CC26153,These changes would help prevent ties ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0088df2dee0c,B3948CC26153,"avoid a large number of ""swing"" state ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+74f16c2bdf4f,B3948CC26153,make elections easier.  ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+592e7bc38e92,B3948CC26153,"For one to prevent ties, that is a hard thing to prevent cosidering we have no control over who someone votes for but it can be solved. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9497f205fc3f,B3948CC26153,"If, in case of a tie, we due a tie braker as you will.  There will be a revotation process with 499 voters, these voters are picked at random in the city data base.  ""...for example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a99e967647e8,B3948CC26153,"Number 2 is to solve swing states, again this is something it is hard to prevent but can be solved. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4f49847735b7,B3948CC26153,There needs to be an equal number over information distributed among the states and so forth.  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+924dd48f9d59,B3948CC26153,"For the conclusion of making elections easier, we need to make the more convenient. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2351360e0e3,B3948CC26153,It takes a long time to vote for you and could be faster.  ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c1e916b40c1,B3948CC26153,"Although the electoral system is slightly flawed we still need to keep the ""peoples"" president, and there are not manyn other ways to do this than to due the system we have now.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3f3889846f3,B3948CC26153,The only major problem is the the system is out of date. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef7475a001be,B3963F9DB39C,"""Just be fair"" quotes many people everyday. In the article ""Does the Electoral College Work?"" Source 1: ""What Is the Electoral College"" by the Office of the Federal Rgister, Source 2: ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer, and Source 3: ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9a51115b4cfd,B3963F9DB39C,I think that the Electoral College should be abolished and to elect a president by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9394fff05f90,B3963F9DB39C,"The first thing to remember, is that the Electoral College is unfair and needs to be changed to the popular vote because the people should be able to vote who they want to be president. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3c086b7ac293,B3963F9DB39C,"The author mentions in Source: 3 paragraph 18 that ""A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible-it happened in 2000-but it is less likely than a dispute over the popular vote."" This proves that with the Electoral College in place that there may be a big contreversy about who should be the next president. Arguments would also break out between the political parties that are trying to elect their canidate president. With popualar vote you could avoid all these conflicts and disputes by letting the people elect the president outright with no questions ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb287242956d,B3963F9DB39C,"With this in mind, there should be no Electoral College because the author suggests in Source 3: paragraph 19 that ""The Electoral College requires a presidential canidate to have trans-regional appeal. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a13e6a21fc49,B3963F9DB39C,"No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite, such as Romney was in the South, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his pularity in states that he knows he will win."" A presidential canidate should be able to gain votes from his region because that is the states the canidate are more familiar with so, he will be able to campaign better in those states and if he becomes president he will be equal to all the other regions. You could avoid this with the fair method of popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+958e01fd1f93,B3963F9DB39C,"Another key point, is that the number of votes coming from each state should be equal in the amount of votes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d9e644096c83,B3963F9DB39C,"The author claims in Source 2: paragraph 10 that ""If you lived in Texas for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you would vote for a slate of 34 electors pledged to Kerry. With popular vote you would not have to worry about all of the votes that each state gives from the Electoral College. Popular vote lets the people deside no the Electoral College deside. If two canidates were running for president and one was from Florida and the other one was from Alaska, their state could be the deciding factor which the one from Florida will win because it has more votes than Alaska which is not fair. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68be6303b556,B3963F9DB39C,"Truly, the Electoral College should be replaced by popular vote because there is a winner-take-all system. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e4ce5fc4c662,B3963F9DB39C,"The author shadows in Source 1: paragraph 7 that ""Most states have a ""winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. However, Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of ""proportional representation."" The thing is that with a popular vote system you would not have to worry about a winner-take-all and states that have a different system than the other states. Just let the people decide and everything will be easy and fair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+77109f79f09c,B3963F9DB39C,"On the flip side, the Electoral College should not be replaced because it avoids any type of run-off election that may occur. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+133055d70fca,B3963F9DB39C,"The author argues in Source 3: paragraph 22 that ""The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in wich no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast."" This shows that with the Electoral College it would relieve all of the stress that is put on a canidate when they are running and the stress could also complicate the process of electing the president. With the Electoral College their will be a winner no matter what happens which will clearly the most fair way to complete the process of electing the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+377f0ae40450,B3963F9DB39C,"To conclude, after analyzing the article ""Does the Electoral College Work?"" Source 1: ""What Is the Electoral College"" by the Office of the Federal Register, Source 2: ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer, and Source 3: ""In Defense of the Electoral Collge: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"" by Richard A. Posner I think that the Electoral College should be replaced by a popular vote system. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+29c147116f5e,B39FCEF07F51,The things that go on in florida about keeping in electorial college is working for us there are good reasons and bad reason where to keep it or change it to popular vote. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bdb1dc3eea19,B39FCEF07F51,I think keeping the electorial college is better for everybody ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f03f6bda3fc2,B39FCEF07F51,"we vote on the represenitive by there good ideas not there popularity. in the electoral college it consist of 538 votes and the majority of 270 votes is usally the winner and he is voted for because of his good ideas not if he is populer with the people or represenitives. in and electorial college where the electors vote in the president and the vice president which helps out the decison for the better man or woman in the white house, so the people should keep the elector college and not change to the populer vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+60365068afb5,B39FCEF07F51,the united states should keep they electoral collge because the people vote and it is won by majority rule and should not be changed. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dc6e46585779,B39FCEF07F51,the people vote for who they think is right for the job not just random people vote its unanimus decison to who wins. There is no reason to change the way things are going it has always been the same way the whole time ever since the united states was made in the first place. the people elect that is the advantage of a democracy which we have and in a democracy we vote by majority and thats how it most likley will stay in the united states no matter who the goverment is trying to vote in who they want but the united states is the power to vote in who goes into the office not the goverment so there is no chane of rigging all the votes so the unites states should not change to a popularity vote. power to the people is an old metaphor that indicates that we have the power to vote unlike in other countries where one man rules and the people have no power to vote for the best man to take over so in an electoral college we have all mighty power to make our own decisons to our future. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+114a663bc8de,B39FCEF07F51,so the united states will stay in electoral college forever but anything could happen to stop it.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ab026edf249f,B3A666840EE1,"Being assingned president of the united states is a very big deal, especially to the millions of people that live in this god blessed country.
+
+herThe united states of america has had different presidents ever since the beginning of this country. These presidents are not in it for the money, but they are holding the title
+
+""
+
+president""
+
+because these people want what is right for this country. But, how do we pick who gets to be president? It all comes down to the electoral college. Citizens of the united states are allowed to vote at the age of 18, these votes are said to mean so much, but that isnt always the case. It really all comes down to the number of electoral votes. Why make all these citizens vote, when the outcome might not even follow along with these votes. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cf5b1e7f6494,B3A666840EE1,"There are two types of votes. The electoral college votes, and the popular votes which is the number of citizens who voted for one certain canidate. How ever there has been times where the popular vote did not win the election. In 2000, canidate Gore had more of the popular votes then Bush did, but Bush had the most electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+179f6b7cf4e1,B3A666840EE1,Shouldn't the citizens of this country be the ones who get to determine who the President is? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1d3d78c37b2e,B3A666840EE1,I mean the President has a big duty and the citizens rely on His/Hers duty as president to keep things going right. The President can make huge decisions that affect these citizens which can make things horribly wrong or amazingly right. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+53c0fa6a5ffe,B3A666840EE1,"Yes, I know the people in the electoral college are super smart geniuses that know what they are doing, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cf220e7cf90b,B3A666840EE1,"but? This is the country i live in, this is the country i was raised in, this is the country i love and am so blessed to be ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7f91d5731789,B3A666840EE1,"I deserve to be able to pick the president i want, or at least have my vote be the reason the president i was rooting for wins. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7ccfab0d6944,B3A666840EE1,"Us fellow citizens of the united states only want whats best for us. We may not be as smart as the people in the electoral college, but that sure wont stop us from knowing who we like and who we think is better for our country. We deserve as much right to have our own president as much as anyone in the elecotral college does. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d4df61028f47,B3A666840EE1,"This God blessed country is home to millions, it might not be perfect, but it is the greatest country in the world. The people who get the amazing benefit of living here deserve to be able to elect the President they want. These people want what they believe is best.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6ac7747fbf12,B3A830730FB7,Community services is what helps keep Detroit safe in the time most ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+812970dae237,B3A830730FB7,I would like to do community service ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5badef691b3b,B3A830730FB7,to keep my hometown from going straight into the ground. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c4cf6ed2cff,B3A830730FB7,"This reading selection takes me back to my fifth grade, and everyday my friends and I would help some kindergartner's read and sound out word. Books like Green Eggs & Ham, the Cat in The Hat, even Nursery rhymes. Later, on that school when i graduated from the fifth grade me and my friends were rewarded for our help. Right now i have a cousin that just graduated from high school last year, and tutor from grades 1st-5th. He's been doing this for 6 years. Most of the kids he tutored are now in middle school and still talks about him every time I see them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+108b1c1d20f1,B3A830730FB7,"Then, littering isn't my thing i have never just threw some trash on the ground. See I feel like i' m to intelligent or well mannered to just dirty up Detroit anything our should be trying to clean up our lovely city. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5307b81834b,B3A830730FB7,"I do lots of things to do in my life, like play the bass guitar, play in my schools jazz band, play in my schools orchestra club, and with all of these talents i have i can teach them to some one out on the street ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0b7bcec6843,B3A830730FB7,and help the community by getting all of these hoodlums off the dangerous Detroit street and bring them to talents that they never knew that had. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc5ba56a183a,B3AB4E6C5678,I think that we should have policy number one ,Position,Adequate,,,
+72c1b54acf2d,B3AB4E6C5678,All student should be ably to use there phones in their free time & in lunch. Its better to have them off in class time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7fed26f266b,B3AB4E6C5678,Because if we don't then the student wouldn't learn. They should be turn off or it should be low. Some student would really like this idea about using phones in there free time. There some student who don't like to go to lunch or like to eat and by using there phone they have something to do. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08dcf1e0b070,B3AB4E6C5678,The teacher get mad when there standing up by having there phone i don't think they will be. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+389990a1001f,B3AB4E6C5678,Most kids use there phone in school when the teacher don't look so its better to have the rule about only in free time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a20997823d81,B3AB4E6C5678,By having this rule i think it will make kids be better because if there not then they will not be ably to use there phones. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+deb227829cdb,B3AB4E6C5678,That what most kids like and want to be ably to use there phone in school. Not all kids have phones so to make it far for everyone the rule should be phones and ipods only in there free time .Think this would work good as a rule but we need to try it first. In high school you can use it so why not middle school. Kids should start see how it work with the phones in high school. So they can have in idea about it. But not everyone is going to think how i do but i think we should try it for a week or two to see if it works. But think that policy number one is a good one and a good idea. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ea7bfa81e5c,B3AB4E6C5678,We never now if we don't try. We should try if it work we keep it if it doesn't then we just say it didn't. But we can say at least we tried. For some student it will work good but for some it wont. Some will have hard time with it but other wont. Most student do there homework when there testing and do good in there class. Maybe is not a bad idea doing this new rule about the cell phones. we should all look at this there some good things about having this rule and yes there some bad ones too. But i think this would work as a good rule for the school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e0e9059c43bb,B3CB635C4341,The face that loos like an alien could be a alien. We don't know as a team because nobody had not unburried it yet ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+36cef11d87e5,B3CB635C4341,"They discover these faces on a red planet that is know as ""Mars"". There could be more aliens on that planet but we don't know. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b3514cb0ff9f,B3CB635C4341,Its not a landform ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+513e28326b3f,B3CB635C4341,A landform is a man made. A face is not naturally made into a plant nor ground. We as a team don't know what it is. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e6dd61663ce,B3CB635C4341,"Others say its land form, and others say it looks like an alien's face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+af8c32dc37c6,B3CB635C4341,"Either one is wrong nor right. If I were to see it myself then I would say it looks like an alien's face. If there was some type of other evdience then thats when we know what it is. One clue isnt gonna help as much, unless we were to have more edvidence/ clues ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40a001405e62,B3CB635C4341,I support my answer and said what I thought was a right/ good enough answer for all the team and people to understand. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b4b5ca2018fc,B3DCC9D9797B,"Have you ever heard about big faces on Mars, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0bb2cb7fb178,B3DCC9D9797B,"NASA has gone on many space trips but this time they found sothing creepy. They had found big faces made in the dust, NASA said they have never heard about anything like this before So that makes me a little scared on how they got there. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ca831a587c71,B3DCC9D9797B,I think that it is scary having planets have faces on them. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1d229549dbef,B3DCC9D9797B,"these Faces were found in 1976 and it was hard to see and in 1998 and in 2001 the face got covered by sand and dust and you couldnt see it anymore. in 1976 there was a group called the Viking 1 sent by NASA. They had found a 2nd face made and it had shadows in its eyes, and mouth. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+86f3efb3cff0,B3DCC9D9797B,"There was a big time when everyone kept talking about these faces in magazines, in social media, and in abandoned stores. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+89b820d05b7d,B3DCC9D9797B,"The Face on Mars has since become a pop icon. It has starred in holltwood films, appered in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery stores.""(5) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a1a084c83fa,B3DCC9D9797B,Some people say that these faces are awesome and that NASA should go on the planet Mars and explore the faces on Mars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13879dcb9fe6,B3DCC9D9797B,"This finding was very important to tax payers. NASA had taken many pictures of these faces they even sent another space ship to go with a better camera to take better pictures."" we felt this was important to taxpayers"", explained Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NAS's Mars exploration program."" we photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it."" (6) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0d3a779fc768,B3DCC9D9797B,"NASA had sent a 3rd space mission in April 5, 1998 when the space ship had passed over Cydonia the took a picture of the face ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+185a68993974,B3DCC9D9797B,It is very hard to find this face because it was under a cloud on Mars. When the space ship took a picture there wasnt anything at all because they were in the wrong are of the planet. When the space ship got to the right place it was hidden but it was in the same place ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d413bc160829,B3DCC9D9797B,"People think that aliens had put a Haze over the face so the peoploe couldnt see it anymore. ""The camera on board MGs had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. perhaps, said skeptics, Alien markings were hidden by haze.(8) ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f2b64eb78574,B3DCC9D9797B,No one has ever seen these Faces again so maybe they were hidden by some or somthing. Hopefully soon NASA will send another space trip to try to find these Faces again. It proves that a lot of people were scared at first but then they werent because the space mission couldnt find them then they did and everyone was excited. Personally i would be scared knowing that somthing had made those then hid them with Haze and clouds. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+22c3219133ff,B3E4B633261B,l believe that all students should perform community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+da768d895492,B3E4B633261B,"I believe this because we are handed opportunities to make our world a better place, an i think community service is one way to do it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+03a28ea4708a,B3E4B633261B,We should take this opportunity by storm. We can be helping a lot of people an communities. I also think if kid do community service it will make them a better person in the future. They will see all the people they helped all the places they fixed an all the plant an animals habitats they saved. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c9894f8b735,B3E4B633261B,"I think community service is a great thing for communities, people, plants an animals an the kids their self. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f046777ce92,B3E4B633261B,We can make this world a better place for the generations to come. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2ea0862d0dbd,B3E4B633261B,Kids mite think your being unfair now ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+559ac9f0f12a,B3E4B633261B,but they will thank you for it latter. This is a great opportunity. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+634779f6269d,B3E4B633261B,"i encourages you to require all students to perform community service. I think they can learn a lot from it. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1ea8ad48b66d,B402430B0616,"Do you want to stay at home? There's a lot of countries around the world where schools offer distance learning. Distance learning is where students can stay at home and be home schooled. It can either be online courses or video conferencing. Some people may say that students won't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they won't be able to meet new people and experience the real world. However, they are incorrect because some students get frustrated around others or even gets bullied which can cause them to not focus and do well ",Lead,Effective,,,
+693e4bc3822f,B402430B0616,"Clearly, students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home ",Position,Effective,,,
+62dbb7577ce4,B402430B0616,"because some of them prefer working independently, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+55931957f9c5,B402430B0616,some of them live far away ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+757d1968f773,B402430B0616,"and some of them doesn't want to have problems. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f23d60ebdc2c,B402430B0616,It will be very beneficial for some students to attend classes from home because some of them prefer working independently. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ed033584da3e,B402430B0616,"There's a lot of students that like working together and being in groups and discussing things, but some of them are very shy. They're scared to talk around others, so they prefer working by themselves. In school, sometimes you're forced to work in groups or participate in a discussion which will frustrate that student and they won't be able to do it. Consequently, it will effect their grade. This proves my claim by saying that students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they won't have to worry about working with others or talk except for the teacher if it's online conferencing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b1f49ddc88b5,B402430B0616,It's also very beneficial for some students to attend classes from home because some of them have problems at school or gets bullied. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1955735370f5,B402430B0616,"Millions of students get bullied in and outside of schools. A lot of the time the problem never gets solved because students are scared to tell someone. If they don't tell anyone about because they're scared from that other person, they're going to continue to get bullied. They won't be able to focus anymore, so their grades will drop. The only thing that will be in their mind is the fear from that other person bothering them again and bullying them which includes; abusing them, insulting them or taking something from them like their food. This proves my claim by saying students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they won't have to worry about being bullied or having any problems and they will be able to focus very well. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a882076547a9,B402430B0616,"Lastly, it can be very beneficial for some students to attend classes from home because some of them live far away. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f9a232ffd34f,B402430B0616,"There's a lot of students that want to take a certain course like a language or anything but they can't because they live far away. So, by online classes they will be able to take that class without having to go all the way to that certain school. They can either learn it by a website or by a video conference where they will still be taught by a teacher and won't have to go all the away to school. This proves my claim by saying that students will benefit from being able to attend class from home because they won't have to worry about going all the way to that school for those specific classes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cceba9dc5512,B402430B0616,Some people may say that students won't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they won't get to meet new people and make friends and they won't really experience the real world. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5d89abac58ce,B402430B0616,"However, they are incorrect because some students live far away and some of them don't want to feel frustrated or have problems at schools with others. In conclusion, it's very beneficial to be home schooled or take classes online because it solves a lot of problems and the student will be able to focus and do well. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2ca7a121132e,B402430B0616,"However, students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they will be able to take a certain course if they live far away, they will be able to work independently if that's what they prefer and they won't have to worry about having problems at school with others like bullying. Being homeshooled and taking online classes is very beneficial and a good idea for others. They won't have to worry about living far away, they won't have to worry about working in groups and being forced to talk and they won't have to worry about having any problems with others. They'll work indecently and will be able to focus and do well.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3fb15c507a10,B40F33AD93D5,"There has been many contraversies over the electoral colledge. The contraversies have been wether America should keep the this form of electing presidents or abolish it from our humanity. The electoral colledge,for many years,has been a effective and conveinient way of an election. As was stated in source three,""the electoral colledge is widely regarded as an anarchronism"". this means that this way of electing a president has been around for many years and was meant for this country. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5134dc18f097,B40F33AD93D5,There are three reasons why it is  important to keep the method of an electoral colledge. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f807fb64fd54,B40F33AD93D5,"For one,professional slate of electors can be trusted to vote for the party's nominee. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bd7ecbca6c0,B40F33AD93D5,"Two,this method is more convienient ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+18cede73515b,B40F33AD93D5,lastly posses more acuracy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+afec453894a9,B40F33AD93D5,The first reason why keeping the electoral colledge is important is because of professional slate of electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ece17dfe3e21,B40F33AD93D5,these people or voted on by inndividuals to vote for there nominee president. these people can be trusted on a high level because of there preactices over the years. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc4e44cf24f8,B40F33AD93D5,The second reason why keeping he electoral colledge is important is because it is far more convieneint for most people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e07a15e9d5af,B40F33AD93D5,"Reular individual voting may take up someones day by haveing them wait hour at a time in lineat a polling station. this is very unconvient to the person,especially if there day is buisy. what the electoral colledge does is take that persons vote into the hands of someone else. this save time and money for the averadge person. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cc8b2ae380da,B40F33AD93D5,The last reason why keeping the electoral colledge is important is because it pposses more accuracy than a regular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb66c2a1a167,B40F33AD93D5,"As stated in source three,""because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner takes all basis"". this means that a person with more electoral votes than popular votes may win an election. this is because electoral votes way more in a way. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9c800ec6bfcc,B40F33AD93D5,"this concludes my reasoning why the electoral colledge should be kept in the American way of electing presidents. the reasons for this is,for one,proffecional slate of electors can be trusted. Two,it is more convienient,and three,it is more effective. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d07b80e55de2,B414B1D87DD6,"Driverless cars, the future of the world. There could be many disadvanteges with driverless cars. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+721c2e8dc0d4,B414B1D87DD6,there could be malfunctions within the hardware inside of the vehicle. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+91a26fe23378,B414B1D87DD6,if someone would hack into the mainframe of the car and take control of it without the owner or driver knowing about it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+09d642330ba0,B414B1D87DD6,One last disadvantage would be based upon the driver of the car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8156f9eee5bc,B414B1D87DD6,My position on driverless cars is that I'm really not a big fan of the idea so I don't really aprove of it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cdc81518cad0,B414B1D87DD6,if the hardware in the car was to malfunction. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5a3c8bbb61f,B414B1D87DD6,"Say if the technology in the car was damaged and the car started to not act properly. That would probably cost thousands of dollars to repair. Also if the car was to not function correctly the driver, passengers, or other people outside of the vehicle may be injured. That is the first disadvantage of the driverless car. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2948b602648f,B414B1D87DD6,if someone had hacked into the the cars mainframe ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+307ab6e18ca2,B414B1D87DD6,If someone was able to hack into the car without the driver or owner knowing it can be very dangerous. It can be dangerous because they can track where that person is at alll times. They could tell if they're home or not and the owner can possibly end being robbed. Another way it would be dangerous is that the person that had hacked the car could control the car and may end up hurting the driver or people around the car. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d2154bde1e8a,B414B1D87DD6,the driver of the car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3824338a2c31,B414B1D87DD6,"If the driver of the car was reckless and irresponsible it can affect him/her or even the people around them. Like in the article it says,""The car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but are alll designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills."" If the driver was to ignpre that notification it cause an accident and many people may be injured. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+66f9cf58f271,B414B1D87DD6,"So like I said, my opinion on driverless cars is that they shouldn't be made and used in public. There are many disadvantages of self driving cars, but I only chose three. The first one was hardware malfunctions. The second was if the car was to be hacked. The last one was all depending on the driver it's self.
+
+That is my position on driverless cars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b92d8bcd91ef,B430B6820321,lets try and keep the electoral college. These are the facts that willmake want to vote against the popularity vote for presdency. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+57e2602c8f8d,B430B6820321,The big states (large population count)of the United States will have an overruling vote against smaller states(lower count of population) ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd05f0b0787a,B430B6820321,some states big state will convince other states to get one of their senators to party up ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+daede474ed93,B430B6820321,the disputes that will occure of the sharing of population vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd15a167f158,B430B6820321,"In source 3 paragraph 4 says,""Large states get more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does."" This means that large states ingulf all of the attention from smaller population states. Later will be a growing concern for the Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8aa7c838a3b3,B430B6820321,This winner takes all voting style will effect the people of the swing state and the real verdict the people want or what s best for the state. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a50d5859f31,B430B6820321,"It is impossible to get a tie in Electoral college ,so you will always find who will president. One problem would be the landslide that will occur rarely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aef9e6617086,B430B6820321,"T
+
+hese would be major problems that will occur and it will be delt with of the populariity vote for presideny and how Electoral college should be kept in the United states Goverment.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c06764bad296,B4528CE5BB12,"I believe that we shouldn't change the Electoral College ""winner takes all"" system ",Position,Effective,,,
+e0949a6b2a66,B4528CE5BB12,It has been working well for the past couple of presidents. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ca6db33c86f,B4528CE5BB12,"Yes, it might be unfair for thoses who are wanting to be electors and can't because the person they are running for lost ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+61ae432c2c53,B4528CE5BB12,but the ones who did win are doing what they believe is right. Just because of one big out break in 2000 doesn't mean the system will fail again. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+7860a7764a68,B4528CE5BB12,"It will gradually progress trough out time and soon it won't ever fail again. You just never know unless you let it continue until it doesn't work any longer and when it does you find a new, better system that will work for decades. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72ec5cfeedf0,B4528CE5BB12,"In 2000 people might have switched their votes because they thought that person desirved it not the other guy. The system of ""winner takes all"" hasn't failed since 2000. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4a2b50a89f7,B4528CE5BB12,It works so why get rid of it. If it were to fail multiple times then yes get rid of it and find something new but it hasn't ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2c5138b77a65,B4994C771190,Do you think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a9ceb93b32c7,B4994C771190,I don't think the students would get benefits from being able to attend clasess from home. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d500912c730d,B4994C771190,"First, the students not have somebody like a teacher to tell what to do and no body give pressuare ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+042212b06585,B4994C771190,For example: if the student don't want to do what the student have to do no body tells nothing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f95af6cdeeb3,B4994C771190,"Second, the student who takes oline classes will not have any friends or somebody to talk. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+69dcc9b77779,B4994C771190,For example: Everybody want any friend or somebody who can we talk if you do stay at home you never meet someone and never know somebody. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+393639db4478,B4994C771190,"Third, the student maybe can get frustate to be lonely at home ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5fd26440e0d8,B4994C771190,For example: if the student take oline classes and watch videos conferencing maybe will be boring and the studend get stress in another part if the student take the classes at school he be with friends or somebody to talk. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+729bde0544c5,B4994C771190,"Next, if the student stay at home the student can do whatever the student want to do ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccdf7477da21,B4994C771190,"For example: if the student want to play video games the student can do that and if the student want to sleep he can do that too because the student will not feel with any responsability also, if the student wants to go outside he can do that because the student will be at home and maybe their parents work all day.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c7a305c7fcf9,B4994C771190,"Finally, if you take the classes at home and never came to school you cannot live the experinces that we live at school. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9f38c4388c9,B4994C771190,For example: if you take a classes at home you cannot participate in any activity that the school have like a any sport or party or any activity that one is so funny and you can enjoy the activities with you friend or teachers who always are there for us to lisen if you have any problem and the techer are like a secret box because you can tell whatever you want and they never tell to someone. That's why I think is nice to get classes at school and I think is not so good to take classes at home because you can get more fun at school and is a experince that you will never forget. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93cd0ca3856e,B4994C771190,In another part if you did not want to get school because someboby bother you like if another student tell you a nickname that you di not like maybe can be a reason that you did not want came to school but you can took with you adviser or your's parents because every body have a opportunity to be at school and anybody can't tell you anything.       ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e96d77e3c260,B4B605F897BC,"Driverless cars could be the way of the future or end up being the worst invention humans have ever fabricated. Driverless cars is a very good idea that could change the world for good. Even though there are some dangers, with research and time, these dangers could be eliminated for good ",Lead,Effective,,,
+93ed21f2fc3d,B4B605F897BC,The idea of driverless cars is a great idea because the environment will benefit from it greatly and human error on the roads will become a thing of the past. ,Position,Effective,,,
+0a0da8f3203a,B4B605F897BC,The environment will benefit greatly from driverless cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b7deecd76ca,B4B605F897BC,"For example, ""The cars forsees will use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.""
+
+Also Modern cars have much better fuel economy and lower emissions than older, driver reliant vehicles. Crash rates will go down so there will be less debris on the road. Human error is also something that will become a thing of the past. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b3cce203510,B4B605F897BC,"With time and research, cars can easily become smarter than a human ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d22283d5ee13,B4B605F897BC,"Humans lose attention on the roads, develope road rage, and brake the law frequently. These are all things that could lead to a fatal crash. For example, ""Further improvments in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own."" Drunk driving will also become a thing of the past and save more lives than anyone could even imagine. A driver less car can also utilize some of the cars capabilities that a human can not access. ""The information from the sensors can cause the car ti apply brakes on individual and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+028ea1cc125b,B4B605F897BC,The idea of driverless cars is a great idea because the envirnment will benefit from it greatly and human error on the roads will become a thing of the past. Technology is advanced enough where we can develope safe and effective ways of getting rid of human error. Driverless cars are a great example of human innovation becomeing a reality. I look forward to see how driverless cars will excel in todays world and how they can improve our lives in the coming decades. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cf7a0b153c3f,B5015A51C0A5,"The reason for writing this letter is because in a recent topic brought up to the nation the Electoral College was being revised to see new changes in the way we choose our president. The Electoral college is a fundamental way on how we control the voting process for our president. In an article ""What is the Electoral College"" by the Office of the Federal Register it had an interesting statement that stood out. In the text it said "" The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election by a vote in Congress and election of the President by popular vote..."". This is telling us that the Electoral College that was established many years ago is the same thing that people are voting for now, because people today are fighting for voting by popular vote but the current Electoral College is the same thing. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3d0315f7afbb,B5015A51C0A5,"The current Electoral College is working fine, this is one of the reasons it shouldn't change but there are more reasons as to why it shouldn't change.
+
+The current Electoral College has worked greatly to our nation even though people don't see it that way but it has. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4fbcf2517ede,B5015A51C0A5,Another reason that the Electoral College should stay the same is because many people want to abolish the Electoral College even though its helped them choose a president that is either fighting for the nation itself or fighting for the people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c46ce059baa6,B5015A51C0A5,"The reason that people want o abolish the Electoral college is in an article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer. In the article it states "" It's official: The electoral college is unfair... Abolsih the electoral college!"". This is telling us that some of the people in the nation want to abolish the Electoral College because they want their own system of electing a president. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+430012ea3aed,B5015A51C0A5,The Electoral College has been named man things and has been tried to change but it can't because that is the only way people as a nation know how to choose a president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d609ecda758d,B5015A51C0A5,"In the article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer it says "" ...The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. and the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best.."". ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f0ee89ab8c07,B5015A51C0A5,This shows us that even the people that are fighting agaist the Electoral College are making random statements that either go for it or against it because they don't know what they are fighting to achieve. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+04da8a4d00f5,B5015A51C0A5,"The Electoral College is the same thing people are trying to change because in the article ""What is the Electoral College"" by the Office of the Federal Register it states "" The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect a president..."". ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+155a9bfa04a9,B5015A51C0A5,This textual evidence shows that the Constitution was actually compromising what the people are fighting for and what is already used. This also tells us that the current Electoral College is what is needed and shouldn't be changed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd2b78fa2761,B5015A51C0A5,"In Conclusion, the Electoral College shouldn't be abolished or changed to popular vote elects the president because the current system is working fine and the reason people are fighting agaisnt it is because they might not know what they are fighting to change or maybe they think that the Electoral College is changing the vote so that they government has their chosen president rather than the peoples president. All those ideas are things that people think when their favored senator, mayor, or President loses their chance. The people just need to realize that the current Electoral college was made by the fathers of this country in order to compromise what they are fighting for and what is already used. These are the reason why the Electoral College should not be changed. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+31a031ca2a7d,B526BA896931,"Getting to school everyday may not be possible to many students based on their circumstances. To others, their mental health might put them in a position where they are not able to reach their full potential at school, causing their grades to suffer. Whatever the reason may be, taking classes online is a convenient way of being present in school while also meeting the needs of those who need it. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+984f1950e815,B526BA896931,"Schools offering online classes to students would be a grand benefit to all students, and could make a profound impact on their learning and their grades. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+8250d4df0cd1,B526BA896931,"Mental health is a big issue in many teens and often gets in the way of learning; however, distance learning could be a solution to this problem. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c3da5f4df627,B526BA896931,"For example, some students have social anxiety, so going to a crowded school is hard for them. This mental disorder could and often will impact their learning, not allowing students to reach their full potential. If being in a school with a large number of students is upsetting to them, they could take their classes from home. This would allow them to still be able to pursue an education while not being in a triggering environment, which could make a large impact on their grades. In the comfort of their homes, students would be able to move at their own pace to make sure they know the material, stimulating academic success. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4aa34872f083,B526BA896931,"Some students may have different circumstances in which they are not able to go to school everyday, but distance learning could help them get the education they need despite these circumstances ",Claim,Effective,,,
+649138bb2899,B526BA896931,"For instance, what if a student has to stay home to take care of their sick mother. Because the student needs to stay at home, online classes would be a grand benefit to them. Online classes would allow the student to be able to check up on his mother while still getting an education. With these classes, the student wouldn't have to sacrifice school for his mother, or vice versa: he would be able to do school and care for his mother at the same time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34355fbaef89,B526BA896931,"Sickness often leads students with two options: go to school and run the risk of infecting others, or staying at home while everyone else is learning, ultimately causing them to be left behind in school. Many students wake up sick but still choose to go to school because they are afraid of being left behind and have their grades suffer, especially in more advanced classes. Going to school puts the other students that they come into contact with at a risk of getting sick, and is the main reason how sickness spreads in schools. With the availability of distance learning, however, students who are sick would be more likely to stay at home instead of going to school and contaminating others. They could rest at home and wait out the sickness while not being stressed out about missing school and having to make up work for all of their classes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7398f8f3b1e8,B526BA896931,Online classes are a huge benefit that provides students who are sick with an opportunity to keep up with their school work while not putting others at risk. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7856d378c620,B526BA896931,"In total, distance learning and online classes provides a chance for students to be able to attend school despite their different circumstances. Students would not have to stress out about missing school because they would be able to attend class from home, which would make a positive impact on their grades. Other students wouldn't have to make a choice to pursue an education or care for their sick relative. Some students wouldn't have to choose between their mental health and the opportunity to go to school. They wouldn't have to run the risk of getting other students sick and missing valuable school time. Instead, they would be able to do classwork from home which would make it significantly easier for these individuals to go to school without sacrificing anything. Online classes would allow all students to have an equal opportunity to have an education, regardless of circumstances that would hold them back should distance learning not be available to them.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2070956b1fbf,B568E9BC99FD,Dear state senetor i am writing this letter to state my point of veiw on the Electoral Collage. First of all i would like to say that is to the people. Because the poplar vote dosent allways win it is in the hands of the Electoral Collage. so our vote is pretty much just a suggestion for them. In a article i read there was a short paragraph about what was wrong with the Electoral Collage wich was by Brandford Plumer. It talks about how under the Electoral Collage voters vote for electors but not the president. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+68847b083909,B568E9BC99FD,Even though there is a great advantage there is also a great disatvantage to the system. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2db9e01e02e5,B568E9BC99FD,I think that the electoral collage is vary unfair to voters as would most people if they knew they where voting for voters to vote for the president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e7d340b5748c,B568E9BC99FD,"May i state that it is vary outdated like lots of old things in amarica they are forggoten or we move on, but this is still a problem that needs solving ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d8d340bd682,B568E9BC99FD,On that note i hope you take this letter into consideration and think about how this could help us in the future.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+98aaaabcd8c5,B56ABAADC95A,Process or Place? This is a question you need to ask yourself ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+ae11b264eb1b,B56ABAADC95A,"Yes, in my opinion, Electoral College is a good idea.
+
+In the cases of having an Electoral College there are some up sides of this and some down sides. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+af924b91fc59,B56ABAADC95A,In an Electoral College it restores some of the weight in political balance ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a66f610df7c2,B56ABAADC95A,It also required a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bf541c2085a,B56ABAADC95A,When an Electoral College restores th balance in some large states its a good thing ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a7d0ffb85766,B56ABAADC95A,"It states in this article that, "" The popular vote was very close in Flordia, nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes."" This is stating that the large states votes becomes one. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8927043553d4,B56ABAADC95A,"Also, when this talks about how it requirs a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal is also a good thing ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a61c9096934f,B56ABAADC95A,"it says in this passage,"" No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president."" Again this is saying that none of our votes get uncounted for, we are all counted as one. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95147110ea5f,B56ABAADC95A,Some might say that they dont know where their votes are going to ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+74d452f00f4c,B56ABAADC95A,but when you think about they are all going to the same place in one factor.    ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+0a659a7ffeb8,B5BFAD94E4E7,"of course because this is america (and because were idiots) we have a problem. no not taxes,no not jobs or health care. its the president,how we elect the president that is. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+62ffa2bf8434,B5BFAD94E4E7,"the electoral college that is. it changes the way we elect our president,and a lot of people don't like that,me being one,and i think we need to just have a straight forward election. ",Position,Effective,,,
+fac88c4d2c0b,B5BFAD94E4E7,"of course you know the electoral college is a bunch of representitives from every state tha have a president in mind when they go to vote in the meeting of the electors. it basically mean your not voting for the president directly,your voting for the electoral to (hopefully) vote for your canidate that you supposedlly ""voted"" for. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5437e36064a4,B5BFAD94E4E7,"this system is wrong because it is unfair to those who vote for the other president,but still suceceed in helping the electoral college vote for whatever president they feel like voting for at the time. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+75909fe143ed,B5BFAD94E4E7,this is why i think we should ban it becuase it isn't the fairest (or smartest) way to handle the goverment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1eb7179bcd0a,B5BFAD94E4E7,"yeah,it is a idea created by the ""great"" founding fathers. and yeah,it is a conveinent way sort and group people like a ""who's with who"" method. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5cf030a0c55a,B5BFAD94E4E7,"
+but there are a few things that can be problematic like i don't know say bribery from the president to the electoral college,i mean come on it's not like that hasn't happened before, ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+91d31b2ed99c,B5BFAD94E4E7,"like the whole nixon thing,and Kennedy pretty much cheated on his wife with Marlyn Monroe. but,this can be stopped just with a simple petition to get rid of or change the electoral college. then,this could stop some presidents before agreed with me like Jimmy Carter,Bob Dole, and groups like the U.S Chamber of Commerce and the AFL-CIO according to source 2. Al Gore didn't win because of the electoral college,even though he won the popular vote! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0832e96f000d,B5BFAD94E4E7,"yeah it was created by the founding fathers,and we should respect there great legacy, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+402b650c6127,B5BFAD94E4E7,"but that was then and this is now. this is coming from the guy who faught for independence and peace...but had over 200 slaves himself,yeah not much of a hero. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+492ea402851a,B5BFAD94E4E7,60% of voters prefer a direct election over a electoral college according to source 2. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0e73edd6141,B5BFAD94E4E7,"please mister senator,please make the right choice and choose to abolish the electoral college because it is unfair and calls for curuption. the information will tell that more voters will be happier with a direct election than a electoral college,isn't that what you want? whats's best for the people? it can be changed if you choose to ban it. they may have been the founding fathers in the past...but who are the fathers of today? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4fe5cae13c2b,B5CBE846C3F7,"In this day and age, everything is always changing. New technologies and innovations bring about more efficient ways of completing tasks that were once tedious. One thing that hasn't changed in a long time, however, is the education system. Students commute to school, sit in class for eight hours, and then go home and do homework. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f2f0dac54763,B5CBE846C3F7,Schools should offer fully online learning to students ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f3e3b92e94de,B5CBE846C3F7,"learning at home would save time, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f55c2747a92c,B5CBE846C3F7,would allow students to learn at their own pace. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+60fb1da79090,B5CBE846C3F7,"Most students take a bus to school, and for some, this trip is very time consuming. I, for example, live thirty minutes away from my school. This means that I spend five hours or more each week just traveling to and from school. Online learning would eliminate this issue, and would eliminate most of a school's transportation costs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d34f9bf1c21d,B5CBE846C3F7,Online learning would save students time because it can be done in the comfort of one's home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+45bab0ce7adb,B5CBE846C3F7,"Online classes are typically completed whenever the student wants to, so online learning would work for learners of all speeds. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7b1ee1b4369f,B5CBE846C3F7,"For some students, sitting in class for eight hours straight with little time between classes is grueling, and yet others have no trouble focusing for the whole day. Online learning could let learn at their own pace, wether it be taking breaks throughout the day, or completing all of their work in one sitting. Online learning would also prevent the spread of certain diseases, because students are no longer crouded in the same building together. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4cd2f3820597,B5CBE846C3F7,"While some may argue that online learning takes away the one-on-one time between students and teachers that is necessary for learning, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a946b0ae7425,B5CBE846C3F7,"there is an easy solution to this. If online learning is proposed in schools, students should be able to request video conferences with their teachers if they require additional instruction. If classes are held live online with all of the students instead of done at the students pace, the students could ""raise their hand"" by clicking something on their screen that makes something pop up on the teacher's screen, and the teacher would then call on them. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fd3e2bf470b6,B5CBE846C3F7,"Overall, online learning would be very beneficial for students and teachers because it gets rid of commuting time and, in some cases, lets students learn at their own pace. New technologies are made to improve efficiency, and we need to use them to their fullest. The ability to communicate with people from long distanced through calls has existed for decades, and it is about time we use this technology in our school system. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f0acb1ce86cc,B64898B85B89,i think for students the academic level for sports should be a B or higher ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2502f9579c2e,B64898B85B89,"think about i kid who like to play sports would only have to do the minimal amount of work to do what they love if u put it up to a B kids who play sports would have to try harder to do what they love that would improve test scores for the school and help a lot of things.
+
+and look at how many kid play sport u could make more sports so more kids would want to join the sports and then more kids would have to try to get better grades to do the sport they love it would also help no child left behind law by improving test scores so u can get better funding for your school and the funds could go to the sports so more people would want to play them so more people would have to get there grades up witch would improve more test scores so u could aford good things for the sch ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79cf3e16e4ce,B654298A5760,"Popular vote is the way that the presidential voting should be because, of the fact that peoples votes arent actually making a difference in who is to become president of the untited staes of america. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+01b6fe2c9cdd,B654298A5760,Electoral College is the way that  the gov't wants it to happend. Voters dont vote for the president no  ore that for for the people that vote for the president. The american voise is not being heard. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ebb0c6c6ade,B654298A5760,"""The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.""(1)
+
+""The Electoral College process consists of selectioms of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress.""(2) The pluthora of just votes of the people dont really endure in the face that its not counted in for the vote of the President. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e9c853522db3,B654298A5760,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8b0c12115c8,B654298A5760,"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusingonly on the tightraces in the 'swing' states.""(13) when the candidate know they arent going to win they just step back and try other states if not they know they are going to lose the elections. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+35965c213a31,B654298A5760,"""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favo of itare mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections ae spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dle was right: Abolish the electoral college!"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b167b296db65,B654298A5760,"The depate between the electoral college and the popular vote is a hard war because, while also the people voice is what matters but while also the electoral college helps out america in the fact that some of the people aren't aware of the votes and who the vote for what so also they might pick a wrng person. While also the people of the unted states of america can be segregationist and some one completely wrong just because of the the candidates race. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6d4e5401569,B654298A5760,"In conclusion, the Electoral College isn't the best way to have prsidents elected into office. But it's in the heart of the American people that stand strong hat should vote for the Commander in Chief.        ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+142c9c016706,B65873355FA8,I think that we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3b15f1ac4ff9,B65873355FA8,"If we keep the Electoral College, then even if you do earn the most individual votes, you might not be elected president. If you have earned the most individual votes then you should be elected president because you have the majority's vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b06eb644dd2d,B65873355FA8,"If we keep the electoral College then if you are elected president but do not recieve the majority of the individual votes, the president elected by the Electoral College will not be a popular president to the people who voted against them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7e9aa3feb06b,B65873355FA8,"Source 2 says, ""Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9db6b125a00b,B65873355FA8,"So with the Electoral College, the electors that are chosen might not elect those who they said they would. But with election by popular vote, the person elected will always be who the majority of the country wants as president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8bbc92136cab,B65873355FA8,"Source 1 states, ""Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators.""  ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+76ddacc320c9,B65873355FA8,"some states have more votes than others. If someone who is running get more states to vote for them, it does not mean that they will be elected because they have to get more votes overall from the electors. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+277ace14edac,B65873355FA8,"Source 3 says, ""The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense...it is the electors who elect the president, not the people."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+72082865de1c,B65873355FA8,"with the Electoral College, even though the people vote, they are not the ones who are electing the president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f79dbac24be3,B65873355FA8,"When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" So whoever you are voting for, you dont know if the slate of electors will vote in that direction.         ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+559a9c3d9e52,B6754C50B4F0,I think there should be changes because people like to stay in fit and some people that can't join sports do other things that are bad for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c88a3cd73c44,B6754C50B4F0,Students think that we should stop wearing uniforms because they are not cool like other clothes. I think its a bad idea because if we stop wearing uniforms then people are to wear inappropriate clothes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+316bf7ef9c46,B6754C50B4F0,Students like me prefer more stuff like sports better food and other stuff but if we don't do good in school we don't deserve nothing like that. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+56931ce79474,B6754C50B4F0,"That's what I think but other people don't. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91df37eb0352,B6754C50B4F0,I think we should have more exciting sports and more stuff that girls can do ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+57d88f98d8e0,B6754C50B4F0,like cheer leading a lot of girls like doing that to support our school when the kids in basketball when they have a game. I think cheer leading is awesome because we can do exciting moves and we can meet more people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+63c45ab75679,B6754C50B4F0,"There is some other pretty cool sports like tennis, or kick ball, or baseball is cool to. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+26452a1b5b36,B6754C50B4F0,When we have sports like that people stay out of trouble more. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3232db4b671c,B6754C50B4F0,The sports that I like more is tennis because I like hitting stuff and i like to play with other people. People join basketball soccer more then the other sports. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c2979d30fa60,B6754C50B4F0,This is the reasons why I think we should have more sports and more activities for us to play more and so we can help our school be better ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+18a912d87df8,B6754C50B4F0,". I think there should be a cleaning group because if we do that then our school will be cleaner and it will help out the janitors more. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c98a03fcf8e4,B6813C0A2302,You should keep the Electoral College because the founding fathers of the United States Of America established it when they made the constitiution. ,Position,Effective,,,
+10c462685161,B6813C0A2302,You should also keep the electoral college because alot of people help with the Electoral College. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cdf96d06d45e,B6813C0A2302,If you the Senitor Of Florida take the Electoral College away 538 electors will lose there job and more. The president needs a majority of 270 electoral votes these votes come from the Electoral College. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8414d9e06053,B6813C0A2302,The 23rd admendment of the Constitution the District Of Columbia is allowed to have 3 electors. These electors are treated liike a state for purposes of the electoral college. Each canadate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+835bb1f384ef,B6813C0A2302,If the Electoral College these people wouldent have their jobs. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+feeccd2cca90,B6813C0A2302,The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. We the people of the UUnited states Of America help choose our states electors. After the presidential election our govener prepares a Certificate Of Ascertainment. This cerificate lists all of the canadates who ran for president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1c7de311ef0e,B6813C0A2302,"At ther most basic level the Electoral College is unfair to voters because of the Winner take All syaytem in each state, because of this durning the 2000 campain seventeen states did not see there canadates at all. The Electoral College is outdated and unfair. It is also irrational.  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0066a2524b34,B6B384CA5F18,"It is ridiculous that you think that this natural landform is created by aliens. It aliens would have created this why would they not leave a sign that it was them. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+15284154aafa,B6B384CA5F18,I believe this is a natural landform for many reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+115b563217e5,B6B384CA5F18,One is that the region of mars called Cydonia is filled with natural landforms like this one but this one just looks like an Egyption Pharaoh. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b199af1656d1,B6B384CA5F18,Why would aliens go to Cydonia and make an alien artifact when Cydonia is filled with natural landform just like that one? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0092bcf6aa57,B6B384CA5F18,"On April 8, 2001 another spacecraft snapped an image of the face looking natural landform and found no trace of any sign of alien activity near the landmark. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a8b59e21bc0e,B6B384CA5F18,"There were no people, airplanes, Egyptian-style pyramids, or even any small shacks anywhere near the landform ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a91037170d82,B6B384CA5F18,Why would aliens take the time to make this landmark if they were just going to leave and never come back. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+96510666d5f6,B6B384CA5F18,"It makes no sense why you would believe that aliens would have make this landform. You should believe me I am the scientist at NASA. In conclusion just trust me, the scientist at NASA, and just believe that this landform is natural not made by aliens.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fcf703aeda30,B6C009160238,"I understand that there have been some issues regarding whether or not to keep the Electoral college or to change the system to a more simple- election by popular vote. From my understanding, the Electoral College has worked for many years with no issues or roadblocks so to speak that have interfered or had a bias on these decisions. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+719291bb1829,B6C009160238,it might not be as well thought out and fair as we thought. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4c45069931fe,B6C009160238,"I was just informed that i'm not really voting for the president, i am voting for the official voter that will then, in turn vote for the president(Using their own biases). ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b83fad2012c9,B6C009160238,"Since i was not aware of this, i am quite shocked. I'm assuming that this is just something that gets passed by or not looked at very deeply, but i willbe that person that digs down and gets all up in the business of somone other than myself. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf23d3221597,B6C009160238,"This is offical: The electoral colllege is unfair, oudated and irrational. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b1236e6214df,B6C009160238,The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without a basis in reality. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29818a13f806,B6C009160238,"Yes, The electoral college does avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d6bf574b0619,B6C009160238,"but, either way the method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state anyways. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a5e4dccec47a,B6D6666FEF89,"When someone hears the words ""driverless cars"", they get excited at the thought of something so futuristic at one time that it seems like something out of a science fiction novel. However, now that dream is becoming a reality. Large companies such as Google or BMW are advancing in this highly experimental field, and Google has been since as early as 2009 ",Lead,Effective,,,
+32fa1406f624,B6D6666FEF89,"But is letting the machine take over most of the time really the best option? Could it lead to even more problems than it hopes to fix? These questions have yet to be answered and need to be. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+935c2830223c,B6D6666FEF89,"In 2013, BMW began developing a project they dubbed the ""Traffic Jam Assistant"", allowing a car to handle all possible functions up to the speed of 25 mph. But even though the car drove itself, the driver still had to remain alert and keep both hands on the wheel where sensors were located. And in such situations as work zones or accidents, the driver had to take over. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c4a5647294a8,B6D6666FEF89,"Moments like these should always be handled by the driver, because the only thing a vehicle needs is one single driver ",Claim,Effective,,,
+86c062c49000,B6D6666FEF89,"If a pedestrian ever makes the mistake of crossing too late on a crosswalk in the middle of the street, the car is not going to be ablle to know if it is coming or not or whether the car can steer clear of causing an accident because of human error. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19f9796d08cd,B6D6666FEF89,"There is also the consideration of laws. In our current era, whoever hits someone initially in a traffic collision, is the one to blame, and the one who helps pay off the other driver's bill. Human error is a natural thing, and we all make mistakes, but if there is ever an accident in which an autonomous car is made and is involved in an accident, who is responsible in the end? Is it the driver, or is it the car which is supposed to be incapable of making mistakes? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+684cfc55f719,B6D6666FEF89,"Allowing a car to be responsible for one person's life is not the best decision, and should be thought out more accordingly, than just seeing it as a fun toy because our laziness is growing so much, that we can't even drive for ourselves. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c3efc936483a,B6D6666FEF89,"Then there is the cost, both on our wealth and our experience. If we allow cars to drive us around and take us anywhere we like, what will happen when it's our turn to drive. We will be less alert, paying attention to our surroundings instead of focusing on the road. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f63a738e6bc8,B6D6666FEF89,Some may argue that cars come with warning signals that the driver must take control soon ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6fece23b723c,B6D6666FEF89,"but will they have enough time to completely survey the area and assess the situation? Or will the car be able to warn them in time? The answer is most likely to be answered, but is still a dangerous situation for a new driver. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+4f0c2b57dbcb,B6D6666FEF89,"In 20 years these cars may be a new one of society's norms, and everyone might own a car that drives on its own. But before we can reach that day, we have to decide if we're willing to pay large amounts of dollars for a car that takes away all feeling of something belonging to us and seeming to be in our control. The ""Cars of the Future"" will cost extraneous amounts of dollars, just for the ability for us to drive only some of the time, and not all of it. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4338cd17bcff,B6D6666FEF89,"Some people may argue that there are beneficial sides to an autonomous car, and of course there are. These cars would cut down our costs on gas, they could even be safer than some humans driving cars, and they could all be traced around on a track designed just for the cars. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+71c09cd84c88,B6D6666FEF89,"But it all comes back down to cost. The thought of replacing all roads with ""Smart Roads"" is not only seemingly impossible, but timewise it would take a lifetime. If every single road was taken apart and rebuilt all over America, the world even, it would take at least 10 years, and the cost would be enormous. And these cars are safe, but if that situation ever hits, no one is going to want their death or disability caused by a car driving on its own because of human error, yet again. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+25662c929607,B6D6666FEF89,"The concept is definitely real, and they have continued to being developed. The only thing to see now is if they can pay the price, develop more solutions than problems, and see if laws can be passed in their favor. It will take years, or maybe even a decade before we see who will be driving behind the wheel in the end, the human, or the car itself. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9c96e5d59db9,B6D776FC5087,I believe that yes we should keep the electoral college. To take it away would be wrong to me i have many reasons why and pay attention to find out why i believe we should keep the electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d93638f25ac7,B6D776FC5087,To start off why wouldn't you want to keep the electoral college to me that's a sign of are freedom. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bacc2e5d004c,B6D776FC5087,The ones who don't know what an electoral college is we will get there soon just stick around. I am arguing that yes we should keep it because its important. The electoral college is the right to selecting/voting for president and vice president and people like that. Now to began on with the reasons i think it is important is that's a sign of are freedom to me that gives us a right to vote for who we want running this economy. Not being able to vote for this kind of thing could be bad because when we vote for the people we want running this economy we are choosing wisely because we don't want this town or anything to come crashing to the ground because of some man or woman who really doesn't care about the people they just want their name to be heard. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d44244afe521,B6D776FC5087,Some may disagree with what I've had to say but they clearly didn't think about it to much. Also some people really don't care about who gets elected they just don't care nor do they wanna vote at all and most don't. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+324bf4e89839,B6D776FC5087,When someone votes to me that's a good thing because we have went through all this freedom stuff and then were able to vote and no many people want to vote that's pretty ridiculous if u ask me that's a sign of freedom like I've said before and when we go through a lot just to get u this grant of freedom and people just throw it away that's a sign of disrespect. I know that me being young and not able to vote yet and probably not making any since at all is probably making who ever is reading this mad but i wasn't put here to be taken right back out at a young age i was put here to live a life that was chosen for me and when people who are to dumb to realize it don't vote or at least don't try makes me mad because their not seeing what there doing just going in there and putting what ever name down on a ballot is wrong but going in there knowing a little information and choosing the person you think would make a good leader is fine. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+503832b73921,B6D776FC5087,People wonder why are world is so messed up and they don't realize it but its messed up because we made it messed up we had the choice to make it better but we chose to make it worse see taking away the electoral college is taking away are rights to make are community a better place ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4c7cf8257b55,B6D776FC5087,"and no one sees it but the ones who actually care and who are with me on this. People could show me a million articles on why we should do away with it but i will still agree with keeping because we didn't come this far as a community to just throw it all away and let people who don't care take away are freedom and rights to helping the community out and choosing wisely about are world and trying to keep are community as clean as possible and as safe as possible. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+761d36651f2c,B6D776FC5087,Well you have just heard my argument on why i think we should keep the electoral college and not do away with it because some people just don't care. I know that who ever is reading this could think differently about what i had to say and they may be saying this fourteen year old has no idea what shes talking about and they may be right but i know that when my time comes to be able to vote i will be there and i will be choosing who i think will be the best and i will care.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8c4ede36b083,B717EF32EE00,"Driverless Cars can help people life more easier. Even if it can make the environment much better than before. Because now we have many cars drive on the street and they will have some bad thing to make the environment be bad.
+
+A lot of people, they are smart. They think that in one day, we maybe making computer-diven cars. In fact, this is a smart way to make people llife easier. But this make more and more people to make smarter than this way to make people life easier.
+
+Then they find a new way to developed driver's seats and they have lights. It can help them drive on the road at night and make people to be safety. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ff28a06f061e,B717EF32EE00,"my opnion is I believed that is the smart way to make people life more easier, But it will make people to be lazy to drive. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+42e392583fb8,B717EF32EE00,"I am not agree to make this type of cars. Because if people life to be easy, they will be lazy in their life. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2a393e898ddc,B727B720430B,"For me, Policy 1 is better, base from my own opinion. Because Policy 1 would be better from Policy 2 ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2714ccda756f,B727B720430B,"For students to avoid breaking the rules of their own school, Policy 1 would be the better choice ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+710365fea44b,B727B720430B,"Because they can use their phones during their break, lunch periods and whenever they have a free time. In some cases, most students and parents prefer to have the Policy 1 so that whenever they have an emergency or an important thing to do so, they can easily contact each other, except for contacting each other inside their classes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0db2e0505fd,B727B720430B,"As long as their phones are in silence or they won't be using it during their class time, Policy 1 is a good choice ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3dd89db05c48,B727B720430B,"And for me, Policy 1 is the best choice among all of the choices that the principle would have. For students, having Policy 1 could be nice. I think they would really appreciate it if they would be having that policy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eb403ea497f6,B727B720430B,"Because if in some reason, Policy 2 would be the one that the Principle will be choosing, there's a possibility that a lot of students will make a way to break the rule just to bring their gadgets, even though they might get into trouble ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+63d2b53a6553,B727B720430B,"But, students must know their limitations whenever they use their phones or gadgets inside the campus. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56bb51dbaa51,B727B720430B,Students shouldn't be using it whenever the teacher is discussing or whenever they're inside their classrooms. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+605add1488f9,B727B720430B,"Because, instead of learning a lot of things from the school, they would just waste their time using those gadgets ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c186f463b6c7,B727B720430B,I hope that you understand me why I chose Policy 1 rather than the other Policy which is the second choice. Because I know how it feels like when you don't have your phone by your side and didn't noticed that something emergency from your family is happening. I wish you would be considering or approving my opinion. I choosing the right opinion so that won't have any alibis for breaking the rule of your school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ed7c75a9bab9,B72D0B4875B4,Most people think that the electoral college is not reasonable. I don't think they're wrong. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+cc1740f3d1f2,B72D0B4875B4,The electoral college is very unfair. ,Position,Effective,,,
+efe112f77373,B72D0B4875B4,It is unfair because the people's votes might be overuled ,Claim,Effective,,,
+42566352465b,B72D0B4875B4,"the electoral college is biased, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+571d2f6c2a82,B72D0B4875B4,they may not pay any attention to the people's opinions. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+31223e88d281,B72D0B4875B4,"First of all, in some cases the popular vote might not be of any value. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+08a1781dd14b,B72D0B4875B4,"Besides, the popular vote doesn't matter in the decision for president it elects members for the electoral college. So if I wanted to vote for a republican president but the electoral college ends up voting for the democrat I would have wasted my time going to vote. Clearly, the electoral college's vote overrules the popular vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4643903b3fd3,B72D0B4875B4,"In addition to overruling the popular vote, the people on the electoral college are biased. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cb74c14c0b3c,B72D0B4875B4,"If the people who are on the electoral college are biased then, they might not take people's votes into account to their electoral vote. I know no one would want their vote to be ignored so this is another reason why the electoral college should be abolished. If a democracy means the people decide who their leaders are, then why are there other people who might not represent the people chosing our president. Quite obviously, the electoral college is biased and might not care about the popular vote. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+306c14bac903,B72D0B4875B4,"Furthermore, even if the people's votes go to the electoral college, the college might not even pay attention to the reasons people give to vote for someone. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+71db59746f04,B72D0B4875B4,Most people don't really care that their votes go to deciding who is on the electoral college ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+100efc06f7e1,B72D0B4875B4,but they are missing the point. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d4e35271cb95,B72D0B4875B4,"The electoral college are made up of human beings and they will say no to ideas they don't like. I don't think that the fate of our country should be resting on the idea that if one person doesn't like someone they will reject the idea. Obviously, the electoral college might reject some ideas just because they don't like them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+430b8382461b,B72D0B4875B4,"To conclude, the electoral college cannot be trusted to decide the future of our great nation. This group of electors might be biased, their votes overrule the popular vote, and they might not be open to opinions. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+22299d80a3b1,B736B35EC849,Would students even care of doing online schooling? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+817c9f36f0fd,B736B35EC849,Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home by online schooling ,Position,Adequate,,,
+28404a140ee6,B736B35EC849,"critics may say student go online to study what they learned, but they won't do online schooling. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+6fdc00d83489,B736B35EC849,The reasons students would not benefit from online schooling or video conference is because students might do it for a miniumum of time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4d9558af57a,B736B35EC849,they could forget to do it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8dc8a058a17c,B736B35EC849,students could also choose not to do the online schooling. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f06fdedbdf9e,B736B35EC849,The first reason why students would not benefit from online schooling is because they might do it for only a miniumum of time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1396532a6d34,B736B35EC849,"The students parents could tell them to do it and the student will only do it for little bit and cut it off. For example, a student parent could tell them do the online schooling and student could act like there doing it and then they can turn off there computer when their parents not there. Students could also fall asleep during the lesson that teacher is teaching. The teacher onine would not know if the student is asleep or not be there to learn to what the teacher has said. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cb76edcb964,B736B35EC849,Another reason why students won't benefit from online schooling is because students could forget to do the online schooling ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f074c38a2b64,B736B35EC849,"Students might forget because the student could have alot of stuff to do and could forget about the online schooling. Students have been too busy on one thing and forget about it .The student could have played a game and not think about the video conference. For eample, a student might hang out with his friends and forget that he had to do the online schooling after he hanged out with his friends. Student could also forget iof they have drama in there house. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87c2feb13c21,B736B35EC849,The last reason why students won't benefit from online schooling is students choosing not to do it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee388928ff5c,B736B35EC849,"Students might not choose to do it because they probably don't feel like it or just don't have time for it. Student would rather go outside and play games than online schooling. Some students might be lazy and don't feel like doing anything or going anywhere. Student could have work they need to do and choose not to do the schooling. Some students may think that the online schooling is a waste of time and will not do it. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cefa054c3f5d,B736B35EC849,". Students would not benefit to be able to go to classes by online schooling. Critics do say some student go online to study, but they would not care about the online schooling. They would not benefit online schooling because students would do a little bit of time on it, they will forget about it, or they would choose not to do it. This why students won't benefit from it and schools should not try to do it.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2669a50f42ed,B7685AA86F85,the Face was just a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+03e6ccfacbb0,B7685AA86F85,it was just shadows giving it the illusion of facal fitures ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de25a29b1518,B7685AA86F85,it's the unusual shadows that make it look like a Pharaoh ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccef3083c44f,B7685AA86F85,there is no scientific effidence that the Face is a alien or some sort of artifact . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+573f8686280d,B7685AA86F85,its a natural rock formation and is not a face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e3c20d6f021,B7685AA86F85,if you found a pepple that looked like a face. Would you think that humans were once the size of a pepple. Or that if you heared that chocalte milk comes from brown cows would you belive it . ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d213cebc90f9,B7685AA86F85,And if that person had a fracture of hope still that it was a face. I would say to that person that you should not believen stuff that can't be proven ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+21c085de3881,B7685AA86F85,Then i would show that person the 2001 photo and ask him does that look like a face . Then i would tell that person that it's something similliar to that butte or mesa landforms around American West ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d28f1fd6d52,B7685AA86F85,And that is how I would convince that person that the Face is just a natural landform. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+63756177ba22,B78A347F570E,"I would like to express my opininioun on keeping existance to the Electoral Collage. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+2ada057be0d4,B78A347F570E,"The Electoral Collage Creates a dicided ground; as whell as, equal and justified representation. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d4905492dc47,B78A347F570E,"Abolishment of the Electoral Collage would not give power to all states and, would highten potential for bias political leaders. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+49b2e9bb03af,B78A347F570E,"The presedental election enables citizen to vote for any idea and share a final one.  For instance: you and your 3 friends are deciding on a what they want for dinner you have more athority because you are driving. You have a conflicting mind; part of you wants mexican food, american, and the another an asian style quisine.  Your friends all have up their mind; 1 mexican, 2 asian, you still are un-decided. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08331a5412bf,B78A347F570E,If a  system similar to the Electoral Collage was established you could use majority to dicide on mexican food. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b6146af1dc99,B78A347F570E,Without part of your mind (state delegations) all deciding on one thing you would either: try to comprimise by inconvieniocing your party to stopping at 2 restaurants or decide that you all would not eat. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b817264e6393,B78A347F570E,"Many argue that without the Electoral Collage equal power would be given to the people and that ""most people worry is the prosepct of a tie in the electoral vote""-source 2. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ee8d872d2f47,B78A347F570E,"Even a equal representation or the ""equal voting system"" would create clear distinction having asian won. ""Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors""-source 1. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2fc92a64d81e,B78A347F570E,"In the example previous; you could dicide that since you were undicided or the party was undicided, you would not dine.  This could happen; however, the election should operate more on the the principals of the Electoral Collage to prevent this.  In example: ""The popular vote was very close in Florida [in 2012]; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in Wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes.""-source 3. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0f2df2474ea4,B78A347F570E,"
+In the event that only Texas, Florida and, California voted yes and the rest of the country voted no, The vote would be no.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35e6f4d756a8,B78A347F570E,Without Electoral Collage the country would been towards the choice of largely populated states not swing states that carry only 1 vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e483c27bfad3,B78A347F570E,"""if an electoral tie seems unlikely,""- source 2. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bad5f72c6993,B78A347F570E,"The Electoral Collage keeps the contry functioning not on the popular majority of voters to prevent comprimise.  Having a decided union prevents seperation that tour our contry apart in the Civil War.  We should keep the Electoral Collage; because, the only real flaw in the system is uneducated voters.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c07f6beef90,B79D1BD832C1,"Different places from all over the world have different ways of choosing a leader . In the U.S we run a anachronism ,non-democratic method of selecting a president . When choosing a president  it is a competition between Democrats and republicans . ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5287504cf2cf,B79D1BD832C1,I think it is best to keep the Electoral college ,Position,Effective,,,
+3e234d0818ff,B79D1BD832C1,because it wouldnt be fair to citizens ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c4d2711186a1,B79D1BD832C1,its a thrill for the presidents to share there thoughts for upcoming events to change the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19821be18f06,B79D1BD832C1,"The U.S is supposably a free country , everyone has a right to vote , and freedom of speech ; if congress decides to not do electoral college , then it wouldnt be fair to citizens ",Claim,Effective,,,
+db25d34a4e36,B79D1BD832C1,"Reason being is that , youd be hipocrytical , saying everyone has a right but you wouldnt let citizens pick who they would like to have run for president . People , would loose trust in the U.S if they didnt get a chance to atleast vote for president , everyone would be against U.S and most likely leave . Even if the people who voted for the future president theyd like didnt win they still will be satisfied enough , because they tried  . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b70de76f12b,B79D1BD832C1,"When future presidents go up for election they become nervous , start to sweat , start to think twice about what they wanna say ,how are they gonna propose what to say , and to think are they really gonna keep their promise ?  ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+29897e933904,B79D1BD832C1,"To know what to say , to bring people in , to share his/hers thoughts to change the world we live in . If congress were to change that , they wouldnt get a chance to share all there ideas with us , to get to know us as a family, to what we would like to help others . Without there annoying pep talks how do we know they dont wanna ruin the world ? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+07d70ee152d9,B79D1BD832C1,Yeah its annoying ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4d1556785ff7,B79D1BD832C1,"but its worth standing there or watching it on telivision to hear , to feel the excitement of there ideas to help the low class , to help every class not evan the low class , its everyone to help everyone in the own ways . ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9bbb7b07e426,B79D1BD832C1,"The reasons for keeping the electoral college are that it really wouldnt be fair to citizens , and the thrill for upcoming presidents wouldnt be able to share there wonderful thoughts to change billions of lifes ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+469a9a03dd3b,B79F66D2BECA,The Electoral College process should be kept because of its many purposes and the fact that it was established for a reason ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6ad129edfebd,B79F66D2BECA,since it's easy and simple and has absolutely no hassle for counting up the votes and adding up the individual votes made by the people of the state. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+29334343be27,B79F66D2BECA,"Since the electoral college process only consists of 538 electors that are selected, meeting of the electors who vote for the president and vuce president, and the counting of the electoral votes by the congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f59d568c0be,B79F66D2BECA,"This is a easy and simple process that causes no hassles since it has a sense of democracy and organization with it. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3234121572a7,B79F66D2BECA,The electoral college process is very fair since which ever candidate running gets the majority of 270 electoral votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c17988e464c,B79F66D2BECA,It's a organized sysytem that doesn't base off of popularity which is fair because if you vote by popularity and have a president in office that everyone voted for but is running the country into the ground because of terrible reasoning and democracy the people and the states are to blame for voting for a president who wasn't guarnteed to keep his or her word about solving the country's problems. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1487ada674c7,B79F66D2BECA,The electoral college process does need a few tweaks here and there but that's something to take up to the president or congress. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4bb06c4b5952,B79F66D2BECA,The electoral system needs fixes in place such as what would be good for the state and changing its laws and the system being able to work with the boundaries that certain states have with their own different voting process and its laws how the voting process works. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c660e4484a03,B79F66D2BECA,It may also need work on how the system supposed to work instead of voting for the people who will be in the electoral colleges to vote for the president you would like to vote for. The voice of the people should be heard instead of casted out by different state electors and representatives that may see his or her own views differently than the people of the state do.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a16640459195,B7BC85276656,"I think community service is a very important requirement to have in schools. We all live in a community, so we all need to work as a community. ",Position,Effective,,,
+5c61e53cc45b,B7BC85276656,Where would we be if people didn't help each other out? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b0304ba40846,B7BC85276656,"If we didn't take the time to do something for the ones around us? No where. We would all still be living in caves! community service has helped us all at some point. even if it doesn't have to-do directly with ourselves, like cleaning the trash out for parks or giving clothes and other necessities to Goodwill or The Salvation Army. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef45f9dd7dab,B7BC85276656,Lending a hand in some way would teach kids life lessons we would carry with us for the rest of our lives ,Claim,Effective,,,
+95e49e8239ff,B7BC85276656,"Spending time in the community just a few times a month would teach hard work, how to work well with others, and how in order to be able to take you have to give back. Also how to accept differences, because everyone you meet wont be the same as you are, or think the same as you might. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+42beecf0addb,B7BC85276656,I understand many students are not open to this idea or don't want to work out side of school. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+91d9dbf2fafd,B7BC85276656,Extra credit could be offered as a way to help motivate students ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b552edf7865e,B7BC85276656,An extra point couldvery hour spend working in the community. high school credits could be given. maybe you could choose how much time a month you would spend doing community service. there could be a group service project so you could work with friends to make it seem like fun! ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+bf6774ebbaae,B7BC85276656,Community service is necessary in our world to be able to perform and have the things that we do. it teaches life lessons that might help in a job search later in life. that is why in my opinion there should be a community service requirement at our school. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f8c165e9a831,B7C17E1993BA,Most people may not like who are next president is gonna be but all just have to deal with it because we all cant go back and pick who we wont to be president. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9f206ff7d551,B7C17E1993BA,It all depends on how many votes a person gets. Some may get only one vote and others will get millions of vote it all depends on if they think your good enough to rule your your county. It is very hard for you to make a decsion that big. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2803d2bf9c82,B7C3128E0973,"Problaby it will be one advance more than big for the world, ""driveless car"" it is another invent by google and other people more, it will help more people for stay more fast were they want. It is one of the best ideas the I ear before but id everybdy thing what they wiil do wuith the other car the we have right now? It is a lot trash and in this world we don't have more space for that. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+75cda36692fe,B7C3128E0973,I don't think it is necesary for any one. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d0d35d973366,B7C3128E0973,the people nw just think it do more stof but the don't think what we will do with all the things what we don't need and maybe in this world we dont have pace jus for put all that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21113557001c,B7C3128E0973,Why this people no think about the people who need help? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+98a34f60e728,B7C3128E0973,"why they need all time new cars but what about the people who don't have house or food? it is a better ide than just a new cars, for what? more cars if we have a lot.
+
+Now we have all forms for go contry by country but why the don't think in someting more special, more important like help other countrys. Not with just one little part I mean if we don't need something new why we use why we don't buy some clothes or seme shoes for wo need it?
+
+It is more easy and better for allthe people in the world. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+622e3d5047eb,B7C3128E0973,And what about the animals? ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+15c6d8808eec,B7C3128E0973,"why we have to eat all time animals? why everything is create by the animals now? The people know they hav fellings like us? Now the ""human"" is a animal, we kill everything what we see ""everything. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3371f94a88a4,B7C3128E0973,"We don't have a lot time in this world, God is coming for us and we need something for make this world better, wecan try to help persons, animals, trees, ans a lot more, we don't need more cars just because the people who wave money think is better foe they.
+
+every body know if they will do those cars jus are for people with a lot mone and not for who really need cars. I know I don't talk about your ""cars"" like what you want but i don't think like you. I think if we have something and we can give that for someone who really need it we Have to do, it is better than use that for nothing immportant or special like people like you want. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f995fc982959,B7E1A842F675,"Many people argue on weather or not of keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. U.S Citizens arguemented how the electoral college is unfair,outdated and irrational. On the other side of the arguement despite its lack of democratic ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4b6579d76ff9,B7E1A842F675,the electoral college has many reasons why we should keep it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+98e49a78dee6,B7E1A842F675,"the electoral college has all practical reasons,first thing first is it Certainty Of Outcome ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a53cf445f71,B7E1A842F675,second that Everyone's President ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+84b78be1cf60,B7E1A842F675,third the Swing States ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6da44541cd26,B7E1A842F675,fourth the Big States ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2bd61c39afaf,B7E1A842F675,and Last Avoid Run-Off Elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+14227654122a,B7E1A842F675,"The certainty of outcome is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote,because almost all states award Electoral votes compared to popular votes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1983b4862c59,B7E1A842F675,"The swing states uses a method called winner-takes-all by awarding Electoral votes which induces the candidates. Voters in toss-up now that they will now recieve the most info and attention from the candidates so the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ef80c1e6e0b,B7E1A842F675,The electoral college stores the weight in the big states in the political balance. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a31f69fe0591,B7E1A842F675,The large states gets more of the attention from presidential candidates in a campaign then a small state does because of population. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8d23ef2d7185,B7E1A842F675,In the electoral college they avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77e97f6f488e,B7E1A842F675,there is pressure for run-off elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec2fc2d18f75,B7E1A842F675,Many people argue that electoral college method of selectingthe president may lose potential voters knowing there vote will have no effect. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9d2dbf052852,B7E1A842F675,voters in presidential rather than people who want express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e0b85047d65c,B7E1A842F675,"Now that I told you my reasoning I hope you will understand why we should keep Electoral College from going away. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+61dd8c208ec7,B7E3F460802A,Senator i argue that the state shouald change the system to change the election by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+02a6dbe586ec,B7E3F460802A,"The people say its unfaire the way the vote for president. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d26346c5ef82,B7E3F460802A,"But on the outher hand in peragraph ten it states that the electoral college voters vote dont go to the president,but they go to state electorsm, who in turn elect the president. this may seem fair but its unfair to voters. Becase of the winner-takes-all system and in each state candidates don' spend time to know who they are electing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09159e5e79d2,B7E3F460802A,First of all not only are candidates wanting to vote for the person thay want to they dont have a chance popular vote wont win. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+abf61f8c837e,B7E3F460802A,but on the outher hand elctoral vote seem to work out for some candidates. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+231106800475,B7E3F460802A,Voters in presidentialelections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that single vote may decide an election. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+701684a47dc3,B7E3F460802A,i belive that bob dole was right to abolish the electoral college it makes it fair to the candidates.                   ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+74b2d3df15f5,B7EDCEA9137B,I disagree to have the new policy that students may not participate in sports or any other activities unless they have at least a B average grade. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+44ac0ba1dd6e,B7EDCEA9137B,"I think that many students work hard to get at least a B average, and maybe if the really love a sport and want to play in it then we should be fare and let them play. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+052b944e3795,B7EDCEA9137B,"Because then I think it wouldn't be fare if a student is just one or two points away from a B average and then not let them play, just because of one low grade or two points off. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ccd11f6b72e,B7EDCEA9137B,"So then if there are only a little bit of students with a B average then there would be no teams or sports because all of the kids would not be eligible, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+312eb02c6068,B7EDCEA9137B,also in the school activities there wouldn't be many kids there so it wouldn't make the activities as fun. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c606c2a5a95,B7EDCEA9137B,Although I do agree with you that if they do not have good grades and if they have to many U' s then they should not be eligible to play. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5ec50b8822cc,B7EDCEA9137B,"Therefore if they really loved sports and wanted to play in them, then they would try to raise their grade for it. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+12699247fbdc,B7EDCEA9137B,So I disagree about putting and changing this to become a school policy. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+334dd9986ee3,B8066E8A285A,"The teenage girl works on her homework while listening to music, she's singing along to the lyrics. She's an average girl with friends and an average grade. She like sports, she plays for the school lacrosse team and also the soccer team. She's happy with friends. Right now her grade is an A. Sometimes when she starts sports her grade will go down to a B or a
+
+C but that's alright because there's always that guarantee that she's on the team, the team's best player. Where would the team be without her? They would definitely lose the majority of their games. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+10a746b95ae3,B8066E8A285A,Students should not have to have at least a grade B average to participate in sports ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c48c5e76f713,B8066E8A285A,"some of the teams would lose, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2e7771cddc88,B8066E8A285A,"they would be unhappy, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c730cafb84ba,B8066E8A285A,she would feel less included. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4d0b07a7f5ef,B8066E8A285A,The team that is un-defeated always looks best for the school. The school who is invincible in this sport. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7be2ad51e289,B8066E8A285A,"In a happy school, many people are more likely to get good grades. Studies show that when a student is in a happier or more welcoming environment tend to do better on tests, quizzes, and homework than children who are in an unhappy environment studying. If we take the student who is good at their sport and make them quit the team just because they have a bad grade, then we would be making a bad environment for the people who want the team to win and succeed, and that would affect how they learned and studied. This would not be good for the schools' public image because every school wants to look good. If we start to make our school look very bad just because a sports team lost which they thought would win but didn't, that might make many of our students feel bad and a bit disappointed. Students should be able to work in a healthy environment where they don't have bad sports teams to be ashamed of, but good ones to be proud of. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3bd5deed7528,B8066E8A285A,"That one student who was kicked out of the team because she didn't have the grade B average to play on the sports team is now not accepted by any of her usual friends. She is sad and may become depressed. She used to have so many friends and now she has barely any. They all want to be friends with that new girl, who can maintain the right grade average and can play on the school sports team. Now the old girl feels lonely, no one should ever have to feel lonely because of a grade that kicked them off of the team. That is not the right kind. In a school teachers and principals should aim to have all of their students happy and fulfilled, mostly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d57e1cb1b0b5,B8066E8A285A,"Remember that girl in the beginning of the letter, right now because of the new policy she is feeling extremely lonely, but only because of the new policy. She wants friends but doesn't know how to have them accept her because they used to be just fine fitting in. But since she got kicked out, people have been looking at her in disdain and not at all happy with her. They wanted her to win for them but, she couldn't maintain the right average so now people are blaming her. But it really isn't her fault. She was just trying to do her best so her team would win and she also tried really hard at grades, but she just couldn't make it. You could make it better for her, you could make her happier with more friends. Don't have the policy there to block her. Don't put a bar on so many students who would put all out to do well on their team, they just want to participate and be help their schools' reputation and public image. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4f63a63bd42f,B83D6D54324F,"I know as well as anyone else that sports are important in a child's life. Some students are incredibly gifted at sports, but others may not be. However, sports are a privilege, not a right. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+634b96408256,B83D6D54324F,Many schools have a policy that students must obtain at least a D average which is barely passing. I don't think that this should be so. Although I don't think that the policy at our school should be changed to obtaining a B average either. ,Position,Effective,,,
+1197b24f2367,B83D6D54324F,"Many students excel at sports while others at schooling. Although there are some students that exceed in both of these fields, obtaining a B average is rather hard for some students, especially with being in a sport. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+08dfee3bc09f,B83D6D54324F,"Sports require team practices which are very exhausting on the body and the mind. Sometimes, when students get home from these practices, they don't have the energy for much. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c14744b14b66,B83D6D54324F,"I know you are thinking that school is more important that sports, and most parents would agree with you, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+dd656e5ccb13,B83D6D54324F,"but without sports and exercise the childhood obesity level would skyrocket as it has in the last few years within adults. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d95044cced0c,B83D6D54324F,"I think that changing the activity participation grade level to a B average is a little extreme. However, I don't think that it should stay at a D average. Student's should actually have to try in school to have the privilege of being in a sport, but at a D average they don't have to. The policy at our school should be changed but not to an extreme of a B average ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+997fa6b74daf,B84458707731,"The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irration. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The electoral college is unfair to voters, because of the winner-take-all system in each state. Candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d66bf4eaaaae,B84458707731,The electoral college also has some good reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2372df5d3acb,B84458707731,"In the 2012's election, obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes. Obama won cause of the electoral college. Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a lanslide electoral-vote victory in that state. So one good reason is the certainty of outcome. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+14cdab3c1c3e,B84458707731,Also another awesome reason is that the electoral college requires a presidental candidate to have transregional appel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f0ccb5449dd6,B84458707731,"No regions has enogh electoral votes to elect a president, so the south cant elect a president that will do something in favor with the south only ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76255df14212,B84458707731,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. it avoids run-off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5d2f14608cf,B84458707731,i argue in favor of the electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5a1a5a09b660,B84458707731,"It would be hard to let every single citizem chose, because some people dont think about others and what it is good for all, people only think about themselfs and what it is good for themself. Plus the even thogh the president will win no matter if he/she won the popular vote. The electoral votes think for the state and what is good for the people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8426b7d453ae,B866BB794434,"The Electorial Collage is the establishment of letting congress vote on whom the president should be with the addition of who the individuals of America elected. Though the Electorial College is not fair for individuals because, who they have elected are not really being accounted because congress takes vote determining who the next president would be. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+97f2962b9407,B866BB794434,The change from the Electorial College would be more favorable by the citzens in Florida even in the country because it gives more of a comfort knowing that the election is a 50/50. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+001593be0f4a,B866BB794434,"In the state of Florida there are many retiries and elders who have moved from all over the country to join our warm weather, many of them have a lot of political views on the leader of our country so it would be best if they had the chioce and knowledge of knowing that their votes would be accounted for, they would not having to worry if it would be fair or not. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f8e80ec8c737,B866BB794434,"Though there are also some retiries that do not care at all about any of this mumbo jumbo and would rather just relax in the sun. Though if there wasn't election based on popularity then the elders would not have the benefits they would like such as more retirement funds, or better health care benefits. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03450d88ee4c,B866BB794434,"
+Election by popularity should especially be approved in all states because each states should have the abitlity to vote for who they want instead of living in hope for who they they want to win ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c767791dc12,B866BB794434,"Also the small states may be outruled by the votes from larger states such as California, Florida and Texas. The ""winner take all"" system isn't really a reliable way to determine the leader of our nation. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+acfbfd5a7088,B866BB794434,Back in 2000 there was a disaster factor which involved the Electorial College and it is known to be one of the biggest election crisis of the century which shot hate to the democratic electors because John F. Kennedy was opposed by the electors but he still won by popular vote. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+255498848191,B866BB794434,"The Electoril;a Collge is very confusing because the time being wasted to elect a president is rather lost waiting in line to just check down a name on a piece of paper. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+99fb68e2c0b6,B866BB794434,Many states have yet to make it on the list of votes so it is very unfair and outdated to be using in the time that we live in. It can be arugued on if the Electorial College should stay or go. It's more favorable if it was abolished.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7604d465d2b8,B8FB806ECDA3,A lot of students are separated on the opinion of doing community service. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+6817773dead6,B8FB806ECDA3,I think you should let the students decide whether we should be required or not be required to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+be9da79a4ec3,B8FB806ECDA3,I seen classmates who like to do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+da51e6f4646d,B8FB806ECDA3,They do more hours of service than what is actually required! ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e4e41ce5ea8a,B8FB806ECDA3,I've also seen students who strongly dislike community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+860d823c0611,B8FB806ECDA3,They would lie about what they did for community service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+569986a9db0e,B8FB806ECDA3,Most people would like it for extra credit for certain classes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d916eab86b33,B8FB806ECDA3,Other people want it for 100% of their final grade in all of their classes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1e9b9ca70be,B8FB806ECDA3,The students are very split in their opinions. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22658dde64e1,B8FB806ECDA3,I am the few students who are in the middle ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+12d6a4b48d10,B8FB806ECDA3,"eople in the student council and I, believe that is your decision to make. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ea6800b437f,B902933C58CB,"The Face on Mars was found 25 years ago by the spacecraft Viking 1 while it was snapping photos of possible landing site for ship Viking 2. While snapping its photos it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face,some people believe its a natural landform others believe it was made by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cbf1452efd3f,B902933C58CB,Accoding to the text its a natural landfrom ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3d7354adb00a,B902933C58CB,because the rule of thumb ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4120c5e3d15,B902933C58CB,the Martian is equvialent of a butte or mesa ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5bf28b9d9d21,B902933C58CB,and some skeptics say markings were hidden by a haze or it could have been because of the weather ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e18ab495c23,B902933C58CB,"According to Garvin, ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size."" also, ""So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on thr ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.""! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7693bdf61e5e,B902933C58CB,In the picture of The Face on Mars if there was anything that could be making this landfrom you would be able to see it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e34330a3f65c,B902933C58CB,In paragraph 12 it explains that the Martian is equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms wich are common around the American West. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e771d035e61e,B902933C58CB,"If aliens were to make The Face on Mars they wouldn't know the sizes of natural landforms. Also,even though The Face on Mars, is on Mars it deosnt mean that natural Earth things can't happen there either. Garvin also states, ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River PLain of Idaho,"". 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a49d8a6e801,B902933C58CB,According to paragraph 8 and 7 not everyone was satisifed with the pictures that the MOC team snapped that were 10 times sharper than the original Vikings photo. When all of the web sufers were waiting for the first image of The Face on Mars it was revealed to be a natural landform with no alien monument after all. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3143f851c532,B902933C58CB,Some skeptics also say that the alien markigs were hidden by haze. On April of 1998 when the skeptics say their ideas it was cloudy at that time and on Mars it was winter. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cc53a62bfafa,B902933C58CB,"Finally The Face on Mars is a natural landscape. Even though most people may argue over what it really is or who made it, there is enough information to prove that it is a natural landform. According to Garvin, people need to use the rule of thumb, and he believes that its the size of a natural landfrom, and some people say it was covered by an alien haze or it just could have been because of the cloudy weather.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85ced9f44a06,B91A56C03A1F,Some people think that the face on Mars is really created by aliens. There is some scientifical evidence to this. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+96e73419e93e,B91A56C03A1F,"The real fact is that the face on Mars is just a natural landform. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+7af4bdafb9f0,B91A56C03A1F,When NSSA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft was in space it took pictures. A few days later NASA unveiled a image. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e147788351d,B91A56C03A1F,"There was a natural landform that looked like a human head, shadows gave the rock some eyes, a noes, and mouth. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+bf4800a9ddea,B91A56C03A1F,People began thinking that it was an acutal thing created by aliens. Scientists didn't believed this though. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+049c8b569ad7,B91A56C03A1F,"On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. The team up there snapped picures of the landform again and people were eager to find out the truth about the face. After seeing the picture when it was appeared on a JPL web site people now knew the truth. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00847d23ed35,B91A56C03A1F,It is just a landform and not a face created by aliens. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eec46878752a,B91A56C03A1F,"It's obvious now, the face is just a naturtal landform. There were no aliens. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a53e0cacf772,B91C344934D2,"A question has plagued many parents and students alike: ""Is it better to take classes from home, or to take classes directly at school?"" Many schools offer a program in which students can take classes via online courses, or video conference at the comfort of their own home. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+26a3405e5aff,B91C344934D2,"While the idea is good, the execution of it can show a negative outcome. Students will show better academic growth in a physical class, ",Position,Effective,,,
+96bc14cdfa39,B91C344934D2,school gives them proper socialization ,Claim,Effective,,,
+54069a0b6129,B91C344934D2,guarantees that every subject is learned in the right way ,Claim,Effective,,,
+987db3e62d69,B91C344934D2,is almost always more affordable. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fc32e39f462c,B91C344934D2,A big reason that a student should not take at-home courses is because they won't be properly socialized. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d981473c0a84,B91C344934D2,"People, in general, need other people in their lives. Friends can help people find who they truly are on the inside. The easiest way to make friends as a kid is going to a public school. Not only does school help kids get friends, but it also teaches them how to interact with people in the real world. When a student is put through an online course at home, the easiness to make friends and interact with people goes away. In fact, home schooled kids have shown a lack of social skills, and are generally more shy than those who go to public school. Many have even developed psychological disorders such as depression, anxiety, and even a slightly warped perception of reality. Students would be much better off going to a public school and learning from there. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+93db78c6c534,B91C344934D2,Another reason as to why students shouldn't take at-home courses is because it doesn't guarantee that subjects are learned properly. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1d0717dbfe39,B91C344934D2,"If a student is taking a course at home, they aren't being taught by a teacher. Most of the time they are being taught by a computer, video, or their parents. This does not guarantee that a student will do well in the learning process. It's been shown that a majority of students who take online courses or are home schooled tend to score lower on cognition tests than those who go to public school. A licensed professional who has studied for years to teach a certain subject is a lot more trustworthy than a parent who is uneducated in the core classes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f53293f04f9,B91C344934D2,The biggest reason why students shouldn't take at-home courses is because it's more affordable to go to public school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+aa4b1e63eada,B91C344934D2,"If a student wishes to be home schooled, participate in at-home courses, or attend an online school, they will need to pay for the following: textbooks, the tuition to the online course, a computer, a calculator, certain teaching software, and possibly more. If a student wishes to go to public school, they will need to pay for: supplies. It's definitely more affordable to attend a public school rather than participate in at-home schooling. Many low income families can't afford it, and even some high income families aren't interested in wasting so much money when they can just put their kid through free public education. Putting a student through public school makes it easy and affordable for everyone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+62b1c6970849,B91C344934D2,A big counterargument against public schooling is that the mix of different learning styles could create a confusing learning environment. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+73b1de34d7b6,B91C344934D2,"While this could be true, it can be easily fixed by talking with the teachers and creating a learning strategy that benefits everyone. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bb29da75f5a5,B91C344934D2,"At-home schooling is not beneficial for students, because they wont receive proper socialization, proper education, and it's generally less affordable. As controversial as this issue is, it's important to note that public schooling is the best option for everyone. Many leaders in the public school system work hard to make sure that a good learning environment is put in place for the youth of the county. A majority of a students best memories take place in public school. Parents need to make sure that their kids are receiving proper education in the right place: public school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+47157af924a2,B94E4F75BA1D,"The Electoral College is filled with electors that people from different states voted for. They are the people who vote and elect the president and vice president. Their votes are more imprtant than everyone elses because they are higher people than everyone else. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. They need 270 electoral votes on a president before the elect one. Every candidate the is running for president had their own group of electors, so of course they gonna vote for them and thats not fair. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7f9a08df8bdd,B94E4F75BA1D,I think that each candidate shouldnt have their own electors because it wouldnt be fair if one candidate had 20 electors and another candidate has like 10 ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+08ca62c9d16f,B94E4F75BA1D,"Bascially the candidate with the most electors has a better chance of winning the election. Each state has a group of electors that vote for their state and thats not right. It shouldnt be up to the electors to vote for their state, everyone should just be able to vote for who they want to be president and see what happens from there. Not everything is up to the electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a67b545ac7a,B94E4F75BA1D,We shouldnt keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9b0e5ba3cd4b,B94E4F75BA1D,its not fair that their votes matter more than the communitys ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3757a8d4b23,B94E4F75BA1D,"Everyone in the world is able to vote for who they want for president. Then finally when a president is elected most people are angry because the Electoral College picked who they wanted and didnt pay much attention to the communitys vote. Instead of the Electoral College voteing and choosing the president it should be up to the community. After everyone has voted, we should just add up who got the most votes and whoever did should be elected as president. It shouldnt be up to the Electoral College. Just because they are higher then everyone else, they shouldnt just be able to choose who they want for president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48e9d9218b65,B94E4F75BA1D,"Also not everyone is able to vote, and thats not fair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+614ed91d9a77,B94E4F75BA1D,The Electoral College adds there votes to everyone elses and then elects the president they want. But what about the people who didnt vote? Everyone should have a chance to vote. It wouldnt be fair that the Electoral College elected a president when theres people out there who didnt even have the chance to vote ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f733234da7f7,B94E4F75BA1D,"its offical: the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62f5ba9a9c5f,B94E4F75BA1D,"That is true, they arent fair because they make it so that their votes are more important than everyone elses. Most people dont even vote for president, they vote for electors in the Electoral College so they can vote for president. I bet that everytime the Electoral College voted for a president people from different states yelled and screamed at them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+113b398d60db,B94E4F75BA1D,So the best thing is to pay attention to who everyone in the United States is voting for instead of the Electoral College. If we keep voting like this sooner or later everyone is going to get fed up with it and do something about it themselves. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+795fa20692b7,B9871E7972A3,"Educating the youth and next generation may take a drastic change. Distance learning, learning from home, should be a new way of education for students. In online learning, students would learn from home by taking courses online and using videos to educated themselves. Students would no longer be going to classrooms to learn which would actually be a good thing ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e8fd6921a2b9,B9871E7972A3,Using online learning for a teaching method would be very useful ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b8d1c2512ee7,B9871E7972A3,it would stop social issues at school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+016f7f3aebcc,B9871E7972A3,allow students to go at their own pace ,Claim,Effective,,,
+43977a73adb5,B9871E7972A3,"allow students to learn more information and use other sources. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+c793f1263505,B9871E7972A3,Online learning would out right stop most social issues at school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b9523497437e,B9871E7972A3,"Bullying would be reduced for students since they're not forced to sit next to or even see a rude kid every day. Kids could only hang out and surround themselves with who they want to be around and don't have random seats or random partners and table mates. Having students not go into a classroom and all come together would also stop the spread of diseases and colds. Several schools have began online learning since the corona outbreak started to try and reduce the spread of that highly infectious disease. Another big social benefit, would be that kids can't be disruptive during classes and talk when the teacher is talking or talking to other kids and disrupt their learning envierment. Online learning would fix many have the social problems we have at school today. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3971404f979f,B9871E7972A3,Having students do online learning would allow for students to go at their own pace ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e8587b83633d,B9871E7972A3,"In classrooms, the teacher chooses the pace at which they go at, and students have to follow it even if it's to fast for them and they get left behind. With online learning tho, it allows students to pause and rewind videos or even go back and understand something they didn't fully understand. Students could play videos again and again and review the videos as many times as they need to so they can understand, something that can't be done in a classroom. In classrooms, the teacher will just say things once, review it a little and explain, then move on. Online learning would allow all students to be able to fully understand and grasp a concept. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ec6e80d82589,B9871E7972A3,Online learning would allow students to learn more information and uses other sources to learn ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1d5b4287f629,B9871E7972A3,"Some kids who enjoy a concept, or just want to learn as much information about something as possible, are limited to how much the teach talks about it. With online learning students can explore the internet and other sources to find all sorts of information on a topic. In classrooms, teachers have a teaching method they use and just have to hope it works for everybody. In online learning, there is several ways of learning like watching a video, reading notes, and using a review game. Online learning would allow students to use each method and whatever they think helps them best they can use. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dcfcd19f651a,B9871E7972A3,"In conclusion, online learning should be an available option for students since would stop social issues at schools, allow students to go at their own pace and understand, and options to learn more information and use other sources ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f451092c414b,B9871E7972A3,Some people fear that having online learning would result in kids not learning and just sitting at home playing games instead of school work at home ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d8a3919b386f,B9871E7972A3,"This would not be a big effect of online learning however, kids who are in school typically skip classes and walk around or don't pay attention. No matter what they will be kids who won't learn and try but online learning would not add to this factor ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+276c3478af3e,B9871E7972A3,"Online learning would prove very beneficial to the youth in education and making the next generations smarter. This is a new age, and we must use our new technical advances to our advantage, and then technology will keep getting better. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c19e598fb309,B989ECD8F137,I would argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states and not keeping the ellectoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b5e30737a67e,B989ECD8F137,some people might still want electoral college because of the certainity of outcome ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+819f20c68378,B989ECD8F137,"everyones president, swing states, big states, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a699f708e494,B989ECD8F137,and last but not least to avoid run-off elections. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7e7320652506,B989ECD8F137,"in my opinion i think we should change the election by popular votes instead of ellectoral college, because we the people .. vote for who we think should be head or our state and who we think is going to be in charge and do they thiing and make our a state a better and safier place to live. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a5d006650b56,B989ECD8F137,We dont vote for electors  ... so many people can vote on one paticular person to be head of our state and president and the other person can only get 3 votes  but in ellectoral collage he/she can have more electoral votes and they win the election .. even tho the other canidate has more popular votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ccc84a73ec13,B989ECD8F137,"The other reason why i might want to change rhe election by popular votes instead of ellectoral college is becauise of the ""disaster factor"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+43c29ad2772c,B989ECD8F137,Which the state legislature are responsible for picking electors..... and the electors would/could always defy the will of the poeple. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97201e6f2253,B989ECD8F137,Those are the two main reasons why i would argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of united states and not keeping the ellectoral college.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+aed30fc5bac7,B9CA103F2BF9,I believe that the cell phone policy should be allowed in school but for school use only ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c3a6dad76b4b,B9CA103F2BF9,"because, school is just a place to learn, everybody who goes to school learns at least something in school ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e7355ec351d8,B9CA103F2BF9,"I think that teachers are to mean these days, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+572ecf4b7baf,B9CA103F2BF9,"when teachers are mean to kids, the kids don't feel like they should do what the teacher has said ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f34b54e4682d,B9CA103F2BF9,If teachers give students more freedom i think students will learn more better. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22e63d7c1bb3,B9CA103F2BF9,"Teachers should make a time period were we are allowed to use our cell phones. If there was a ten to twenty class of free time and we were allowed to use our cell phones, i think students wound think better and feel better that they don't have to keep there phones hidden all the time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+576feb451a5b,B9CA103F2BF9,When people get cough with there cell phones they get scared and most of the time dislike the teacher that took it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e6aeaa5f07b,B9CA103F2BF9,"When the teacher takes it, students get scared that they will go through everything on there phone and tell there parents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0edb93d7ba9a,B9CA103F2BF9,When people take phones to school most of them are positive that they will get away with it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7056c4c69de3,B9CA103F2BF9,If we are allowed to bring them most people would be less worried and would think better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a7108bb86de8,B9E9DC1D176F,"What is electoral college? The electoral college is a process, not a place. the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. But it is also a bad thing because you help choose your states electors when you vote for president because when you vote for president because when you vote for your canadate you are actually voting for your canadates electors. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5f9de5d36d6c,B9E9DC1D176F,I think electoral collage is is a stupid process and is definitly outdated. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+efa923ba3c49,B9E9DC1D176F,"In the same light, I think the electoral collage is a stupid idea beacause and that they should of got rid of it a long time ago it is like were not even voteing annymore ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+91964cae0525,B9E9DC1D176F,"its like someone messed up the votes and said that romney got 538 votes and obama only got 438 votes. Like bob dole said,""abolish the electoral college"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cb3678a93c5,B9E9DC1D176F,"but you have to remember, the electoral college is a good thing to most presendental elections. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7425ae7db1c6,B9E9DC1D176F,"the only one election that it didnt help on was in 2000 al gore recived more indivisial votes than george bush nationwide, but bush won the election, reciveing 271 electoral votes to gore 266. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+31c97d548d46,B9E9DC1D176F,"in concclusion, electoral collage is good because it helps presedental elections but its bad because it is like the U.S. riging the votes    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+597799f53022,BA117C57D525,I believe should change the vote of the Electoral College into a popular-based vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7ef36d9d748f,BA117C57D525,"In order to understand each side, we must first comprehend the process behind the Electoral College. Posner stated, ""...it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fc2a4aad77f,BA117C57D525,"This is the one of the most important concepts to understand in the process of the Electoral College, for we must know that each vote you compose, you vote for a slate of electors, who will basically vote for their candidate. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b803c2c4e860,BA117C57D525,"""The Electoral College is a process, not a place"" ( ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+40cfe8a985a0,BA117C57D525,"""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c31109e41340,BA117C57D525,"This indicates how the tie could carry the vote to the House of Representatives, where the federal judgement takes place of voting for the president. Not only this, but Plumer also stated,""Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters"" (2). This statement from Plumer strongly imposes the knowledge that this tie carried to the House of Representatives would hardly reflect the will of the people due to census of the population. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20cb03ba4f48,BA117C57D525,"the vote in 2000 where the system actually seemed to flaw when Gore recieved a higher popular vote than Bush, however, Bush received a higher electoral vote. In this situation, is this truly fair? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+705fdaecb2e2,BA117C57D525,This example dipicts how the vote is truly determined on a group of people from the population rather than a vote depending upon the entire nation itself. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8785a5e0efad,BA117C57D525,"""...the electoral college is unfair to voters...swing states..."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d38db2d7b123,BA117C57D525,"This brings us the idea of the swing states and how the candidates in the winner-take-all system do not bother to go to states they know that they have no chance of winning, which harshly reveals that some votes may be biased from the electors ignoring other states. ""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" (Plumer,2). This concludes how biased the Electoral College can be when it comes to ties, representatives, the disaster factor, and a great multitude of concepts and situations where the Electoral College has flawed. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76eb73793dfa,BA117C57D525,"why the Electoral College should not be changed in any way, due to the ""...Certainty of Outcome...Everyone's President...Swing States...Big States... Avoid Run-Off Elections..."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+aab0c2c0794a,BA117C57D525,These subtitles are points that Posner focused on that he believes can persuade why the Electoral College is somewhat efficient. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+033c1a87cba6,BA117C57D525,"I can counter that the certainty of the vote is false due to the fiasco of Gore and Bush in 2000, as well as the concept of the House of Representatives that I mentioned earlier as well. In the factor that Posner mentioned in his point of everyone's president, I do not find this very accurate due to the reason that our vote relies on a slate of electors, not us entirely, as it would in a popular vote. In swing states, it mentions in the article of Plumer that a winner-takes-all method is unfair to voters because electors ignore states that they do not have confidence in winning the vote. A major point that I disagree with would be the point that Posner pointed out with Big States, where he mentioned that,""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution..."" (3). In this, I would argue that this is unfair, because of the inequality of representatives due to population, which is not the voter's decision. In the statement of Avoid Run-off Elections, Posner states that, ""The Electoral College avoids that problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast"" (3). I find this false due to the reason that the Electoral College is based on a different amount of voters and electors in each state, which in turn is viewed unfair because there is a factor of the swing states once again, explains that some electors choose states over another which lets us show how unfair the Electoral College is, generally speaking. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+6d8c7c7686fc,BA117C57D525,"In conclusion, we have established our opinion on why the vote should be changed into a popular vote instead of the Electoral College due to a myriad of concepts, such as the disaster factor in 2000, why swing-states are unfair, the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote, just to reveal the tip of the iceberg in our arguments of understanding why the Electoral College is biased, irrational, and unfair. We have also covered the counterclaims and reasoned them with logic, reality, and true rationality of why the Electoral College shoud be abolished in the vote of the President of the United States of America. So, ask yourself as a state senator, who is truly in the hands of the final say for the President? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b1fdd6bbd316,BA1F4C988D94,I feel like it would be a great idea to have Driverless Cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+18c0266ddb84,BA1F4C988D94,It'll prevent people from crashing into others and risking their lives ,Claim,Effective,,,
+be24d4bf96bb,BA1F4C988D94,it'll decrease chances of trafic on express ways ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3c53e79bc4e6,BA1F4C988D94,And marketing would sky rocket. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6f041926505d,BA1F4C988D94,"Many people would love to travel places but they'll get lazy to drive, but if they have a car that can drive itself then it would make it better on the humans life aswell. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d089345a2b01,BA1F4C988D94,Many people also agree on how bad it is. Honestly it does have some flaws and miss happs. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e0fea5fc468f,BA1F4C988D94,"One of them are getting sent to a different location. Just like G.P.S., you type in your address and sometimes it sends you somewhere you didn't want to go. A Driverless Car is like a driving G.P.S., it could also have a malfunctioning problem it could put your life at risk and others. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ff3a91c17627,BA1F4C988D94,At the end of the day technology will have a lot of malfunctioning problems and a Driverless Car will be one of them. So be smart and purchase one at your own risk. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e4139bc35e7b,BA2C7291BBFA,"The reason for this paper is that i would like to, participate in anything that is required to do. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+77274fe64c64,BA2C7291BBFA,I want to help in the communities work. I want to help others and do something important. I want to have a good for my own good and others ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1bf2e6e88224,BA2C7291BBFA,I think that is important to help because we never know if we will need help later on ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d5a40370140c,BA2C7291BBFA,And also i think that is important to do good things for the community sense we live and are the community ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bc9860766161,BA2C7291BBFA,My idea is to help reading to little kids or even clean the school. i would like to help on something productive and on something that benefits all ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+21d879c7e6d2,BA2C7291BBFA,the other thing that i personally think that is a good idea is to give food and water to people that do not have it. we can all donate food and gallons of water and then cook it and go to places where they really need the food and give it to them. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+03e7657e239a,BA2C7291BBFA,I think that when we give we get the double of that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d184ad3026f,BA2C7291BBFA,"we can even go and buy cloth and give it to poor children that need it. i know that there is maybe more than 10 kids this really need cloth and food, i know because two years ago i went on vacation to Mexico and I was being really selfish. My dad took me to an orphanage and i got to see how the poor kids lived in that horrible place and I imagine how it wold be if i lived there. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bbd07598a7ab,BA2C7291BBFA,from that i experienced that you should not care only about your self but care and about others too. that is the reason that i am willing to help because i know how people need help and in many ways that is why i want to help. i know it may be a hard job but it is worth all the work. I know that it feels good ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cebd94c37574,BA47D0FEA751,"The development of a human contolled car is not the reason for the cars not being far more advanced, but the safety of the drivers and passengers. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d3081aa2a3af,BA47D0FEA751,"The cars would make everyday life more simple and less stressful, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fbc651178a56,BA47D0FEA751,"the cars would have to be more and more carfully programed and very well tested, to ensure they don't cause harm to the driver and its self. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+28382178ce61,BA47D0FEA751,If everybody drove in an driverless car there would be less recks and seafer conditions, but it would be very expensive. ,Claim,Adequate,,
+f797374c5112,BA47D0FEA751,"The materials and costs would sky rocket, gas companies and bio-fuel makers would be very unhappy becasue they would lose there jobs. The roads would also be very risky to work with. traffic jams and heavy pedestrian activity would have to be very important; The sensors would have to be top of the line and have a very sensitive trigger for response. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1df9e46d27e,BA47D0FEA751,In recent years the cars have been more and more technologically advanced. Radar and mapping have become much more adapt and are being updated much more frequently. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7b1070c038b5,BA47D0FEA751,"There are many conserns people may have, but the cars have come a very long way and are becoming even more capable each day. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6421fac9b771,BA47D0FEA751,They may not be the best idea right now but in the next decade or so will be obsolute . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+973a0bbbf2d9,BA8756AB310B,Community service is a great thing to do for the environment. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c1b233640c65,BA8756AB310B,This assignment for others to do community service will help out our community alot thanks to your gratitude. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a5bb84ad23a3,BA8756AB310B,I know for a fact that once every student does community service that our community will be showing a great example for other students at other schools. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb5e10c327ef,BA8756AB310B,This will help others relize how important the environment is these days and how bad it is now. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ecc6056b851f,BA8756AB310B,Students will begin to relize that life isn't all about games and electronic devices. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64795e9a41ae,BA8756AB310B,Its about the hard work in life that gets your through the bad and good. And that you need to show respect for the environment and others around you. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0dbee20ff626,BA8756AB310B,Wouldn't you want to people to clean up after themselves. Instead of you doing it for them. People have been littering for years and it is now time for people to take responsibility for there actions. We need to show them that doing a little work for the community can make a big difference in our world that we live in today. It is time for people to fix there mistakes and admit what they have done wrong. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba791fe5bcdd,BA8756AB310B,"I hope that you consider my letter as a letter of hope and a chance for something new. So do what is right and allow people to relize that when you do something for the community it will do something back for you. Which would be a nice, free, cleansed world that is safe for others to live in and you no longer have to worry about the safety of the environment. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6fea13dc8806,BAAE75D65C1D,Most people would argues that allowing students to have their cell phones would be a distraction well no not really ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a1606e6446ba,BAAE75D65C1D,it would be a good thing not to really use a cell phone but to be able to have it just in case let me tell you why. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+73cd437e8b44,BAAE75D65C1D,like me many students do after school activities such as sports or academic UIL activities and these require many hours of long hard work well after practice for theses events is over you need a ride over and since the majority of the student body doesn't have cars we need a way to contact our parents ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+266140a1138c,BAAE75D65C1D,if we weren't allowed to bring our cell phones to school we would have to use a school telephone and that could take a long time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1920a8b19e49,BAAE75D65C1D,For example in our coaches office their is one phone that allow us to us so imagine if 45 kids trying using that one phone it would really be a hassle. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92cc1cfdca41,BAAE75D65C1D,Plus most kids that have cell phone don't even get them out during the day so what it hurt allowing us to have our cell phones. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9036c829ec4,BAAE75D65C1D,What if their was a intruder on campus ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12caeafe3c72,BAAE75D65C1D,wouldn't you want he police to get their as fast as they could well if their kids had their cell phones the police would about a hundred responses in about a minute same thing with a fire or any other emergency ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a7bc3107f4d1,BAAE75D65C1D,So over all yes Kids should be allowed to have their cell phones at crowd. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+684a80333089,BACC53ECC1FB,"Would you like to vote, or do you feel obligated to vote? I personally want my vote to make a difference ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+98154af4855d,BACC53ECC1FB,I would want to keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+994b7d5f5297,BACC53ECC1FB,because it expess others to vote and to have freedom of speech of knowing which candidate would be better to control our world of which we live in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bafe01eff89b,BACC53ECC1FB,"If you are willing to vote, choose carefully and be percise with your answer. Don't let others get in your way, it's your choice and time, so express a political preference rather than deciding an election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2d7fb083c06b,BACC53ECC1FB,"First of all, voting is all about the candidates, try to understand and know the candidates before voting ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f4ea44a81845,BACC53ECC1FB,"Voters sometimes get confused about the elctors and vote for the wrong candidate."" If you didn't know the candidates and voted the wrong candidate, then your vote may make a difference and you would have to wait patiently for four years intill your able to vote again for a different candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8db543fc47ea,BACC53ECC1FB,"Secondly, If you don't want to waste your time and thinking that your vote would not make a difference, then I'm sure others feel the same way. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ce557d8fbd8c,BACC53ECC1FB,"""A large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does."" Every state should get the equal amount of attention then any other state, and it should all be about the electors by sharing their own opinions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+abc46da2fd46,BACC53ECC1FB,"Thirdly, Candidates should think about their electors and keeping this world safe and sercure for us rather than just wanting to be in the white house. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a97a98980f35,BACC53ECC1FB,"""Candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the swing states."" It's great that the candidates are appreciative by the electors and wanting our vote to count. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8065ab97f606,BACC53ECC1FB,"In conclusion, we cannot control electors who wants to vote for a candidate that others may dissagree on, but we can control our own vote.
+
+It's your decision whether to vote or not and who do you approve for. Your vote can make a difference and every bit counts. So there is a reason to have the Electoral College.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ad86141c0cd4,BB27E087BE9E,"I feel as if we got rid of the electoral college it would just cause us more trouble that we are dealing with at the moment. the electoral college helps us so dramaticly, and some people just don't understand how much it really helps. Everyone might think they know so much about the electoral college, like if we got rif of it everything would just be fine. No one really knows what really goes on all the time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7cfc4c60a484,BB27E087BE9E,I could not  imagine if we were to ever et rid of the electoral college that has been there since our founding fathers. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cd3bcf43b7d7,BB27E087BE9E,If we we going to change the election to by a popular vote thngs would get out of hand and horrble things could happen. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+309126e35d8f,BB27E087BE9E,"Large states as Texas, California, and Minnesota would have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. People not in those states would get angry and things would get bad. It takes 270 out of 538 to be elected president and if changing to popular vote for the election would be thelargest state elector would be the president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+03a368c16885,BB27E087BE9E,Yes there are things that are wrong in the electoral coleege ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4a8a53a152cf,BB27E087BE9E,but nothing is perefect as we all know. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+53c2ea6a9bd7,BB27E087BE9E,"In Texas if you wanted to vote for John Kerry you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry, and thats just one thing that is wrong. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5da1c6a5b0e6,BB27E087BE9E,"Another thing wrong about the electoral college is a tie in the electoral vote. If happened the election wouldbe thrown to the House of Representatives, where state dlegations vote on the president. Then the senate would then choose the vice-president. Because each state casts only ne vote, the single representive from Wyoming, representing 500,00 voters, would have as much as the 55 represenyives. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82a8aacfe58f,BB27E087BE9E,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+46cb87da8ca0,BB27E087BE9E,"Nixon and Clinton both had only a 43 percent chanceplurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the electoral college. There is pressure for run-off elections when no canidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably prodeuces a clear winner. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cdcbc5d687e,BB27E087BE9E,If the election changed to a popular vote things as we know it would change drasticly.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8fd359d1daca,BB3A6C2D0B65,I think we should keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9d48e8924590,BB3A6C2D0B65,"Even though it is despised method of choosing our nation leader, it is the best form of desiding who will run and the winner. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5990a1d22385,BB3A6C2D0B65,"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding father established it in the Constitution as a compromise between elections ot the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting for the electors wherer they vote for the President and the Vice President, and counting of the electoral votes by Congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+875f84cb96d4,BB3A6C2D0B65,"I think that we should keep the Electoral College for five reasons. Number one,
+
+Certainty of Outcome 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45900bea6ea1,BB3A6C2D0B65,. Which is a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+28804f825206,BB3A6C2D0B65,Everyone's president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11edd009f874,BB3A6C2D0B65,Which is the Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+355486ba3202,BB3A6C2D0B65,Swing States ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fc0720d3ea4c,BB3A6C2D0B65,The Swing States is a winner-takes-all method of awarding electoral votes incluces the canidates. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e12ec699196,BB3A6C2D0B65,Big States ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+84e2e21f4c73,BB3A6C2D0B65,The Big States is the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the politcal balance that the large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd56f427f580,BB3A6C2D0B65,Avoid Run-Off Elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9022365fbe36,BB3A6C2D0B65,. Avoiding Run-Off Elections is when the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4d843995c1b,BB3A6C2D0B65,"The Elecoral College is not all that fair though because it is an anachronism, a non-democtratic method of selecting a president the ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+704447fdff10,BB3A6C2D0B65,"I think we should keep the Electoral College. Even though it is despised method of choosing our nation leader, it is the best form of desiding who will run and the winner. But it is the way our founding fathers made this nation and wanted it to stay that way because they created it that way. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff0611ecc6b9,BB3EBEF87BBB,"Hi, my name is Decaon. And I work for NASA. I am here to discuss the face on mars. Many people think that it was created by aliens ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+924ff93f5eec,BB3EBEF87BBB,"But I am here to explain why it wasn't created by aliens. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+102fec9f62a4,BB3EBEF87BBB,The first photo was taken in 1976 by the Viking 1 Spacecraft. The craft was circleing Mars trying to find a spot for its sister ship to land. The Viking 2 Spacecraft. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24f9f0f10b0b,BB3EBEF87BBB,The first reason to why people think it is alien. Is the quality of the pictures that were taken. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2700eac7949d,BB3EBEF87BBB,"The first picture was taken in 1976 so the resolution of the picture wasnt very good. Which caused it to look like there was a nose, eyes and a mouth. But pictures that were taken years after show that it could have been the quality. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f0f4d0dedc3,BB3EBEF87BBB,During july 1976 it would have been winter on mars at the time. So that means the storms on mars could have casted a shadow. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3f33c26d6ce0,BB3EBEF87BBB,But many still believe that it is alien. Even though this some of the best evidence to peove the face on mars isnt alien but a mistake. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+31aa7762be9d,BB3EBEF87BBB,It is simialr to some of the rock formations that we have on Earth. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ff22ff547a92,BB3EBEF87BBB,"Scientist have found that in the western United States there are rock formations that are very similar. They are simailasr to the snake river palin in Idaho. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+272ebbbb8590,BB3EBEF87BBB,The face on Mars was not created by aliens. but created by an optical illusion. That are found on Earth as well as On Mars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+46cfcf57f8d5,BBE0D2A103B3,i feel like you should keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6660ac02ab21,BBE0D2A103B3,because it helps kids in college figure out how the election goes and for them to vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e957fcfa71e6,BC0D8223C604,"Mr. and Mrs. Smith get prepared for the elections, which is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. They're both really assured on who they are electing, Mr. Keen, the remarkable Republican canidate. Mr. Keen would most definitely operate in Mr. and Mrs. Smiths' favor, due to the fact that Keen offers a convinient medical insurance for they're family, opposes of abortion and is projecting sites for the unemployed individuals. Clearly, candidate Mr. Keen is a go for the Smiths'  family, but what if they're doomed of their vote not getting qualified due to the systems', such as the Electoral College? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+05720b5cf6c9,BC0D8223C604,"The Electoral College is a ominous process, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+79a2a13cc907,BC0D8223C604,"due to the fact that voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+109b4460e667,BC0D8223C604,disvalues ones' citizenship rights ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cc82559e09a4,BC0D8223C604,"it's going to influence the country of not voting. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8612373b7aea,BC0D8223C604,"Firstly, the Electoral College is a cynical process where not everyones' vote is taking account of. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6bebabc89b15,BC0D8223C604,"Imagine, voting in the upcoming election in vain knowing that organizations that only select the votes of one entire state, unconsious of the other millions individuals in the other surplus of the nation exist. The possibility of the one in fifty states choosing majorly one particular candidate, is highly risky for the goverment, and no one should permit putting in risk the goverment with this stubborn prefrence of electoral votes. Incontestably, the Electoral College System, is not a method of voting that should be unresposibly utilized to advantage the four years of presidency ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a6359ae7d19a,BC0D8223C604,"Secondly, voting is a stupendous privilege that allows' one to vote in the adulthood stage. Perhaps, because in the adulthood stage one is aware of all the current economic situations and one is noticable of the advantages a former president can serve them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51e086bee736,BC0D8223C604,"The former citizens' privileges are unfortunately disvalued lately, with the Electoral College system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a930882aa4a5,BC0D8223C604,"It's dreadful that the anticipation a legal individual once awaited on, can no longer be celebrated or reinacted, with this fashion of electing states, that manage the majority votes of the respective candidate. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? That results in a false and negative answer. Thence, it is more than clear that the old-fashion and benevolent method of regrouping all the cadenced voices of all the recievable votes is appropate and suitable for the public and president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a211189c246b,BC0D8223C604,"Thirdly, the Electoral college influences countries to not participate in the privilege of voting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+453afebe02ff,BC0D8223C604,"Once the citizens, have the knowledge of these unprudent organizations, voting is going to be outlooked as an petition, that isn't necessary of taking toll of. Due to the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing'' states. The pending thought, that ones' state might be chosen out of the many, is certainly doubtful. The Electoral College, can upbring wins in the popular votes but lost in the presidency, these democracies need to be abolished because it should be a doubt that the President and the opposed public, should be uncondemed of. Clearly, the definition of this service is dooming and should be reinforced from the Constitution, to prevent the countrys' votes from going unknown. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+606d042217c5,BC0D8223C604,"It is at time, at last, to conclude all the disadvantages of the Electoral College in one, it's ominous due to the fact that the public votes not for the president, but for a state of electors, disvalues ones' citizenship rights and influences' the country of not voting. The opression against the Electoral College, has it's witty motives. As we all know, the most popular partys are the Republic and Democrat. If the Electoral College, only selects one state out of the entire nation, that allows one states, that carries one culture of people to form the regimen of the rules of that successful party. No goverment, should suit this fashion, because it isn't right in any shape or form. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7fca5470b5a0,BC2333002957,"There has been an ongoing conflict on the matter of the proper method to use when deciding on a president: use of the electoral college, or popular vote. I believe that this should be looked upon in greater concern than it currently is. Not only do many people question this arguement, but they feel uncomfortable by it too. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5721b454bd72,BC2333002957,I believe the electoral college should be taken away from the process. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3f7a3a98c2e2,BC2333002957,"This is a more secure way of voting because the people of this nation feel as if whom ever they vote for may not actually be voted for by the electors. And this is, in no way, a good thing for the nation. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9c930cf31f69,BC2333002957,"In the first place, the electoral college has its flaws, as anything would. But it's these flaws that the popular vote dosen't have that makes it a less valid way to decide something as important as presidency. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4b52494f069b,BC2333002957,The electoral college has a seemingly fair way of deciding such a thing. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8523d7641d4a,BC2333002957,Each state is given a certain number of electors to represent its population (Ex. A small state such as Maryland would have less electors than California). ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+87e2d789b50f,BC2333002957,"It seems alright, until you realize how unfair it really is ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3f253ce5e703,BC2333002957,"In one way, though rare, the electors may switch outlooks, and end up voting for the opposite candidate than whom they were voted, in turn, to vote for. Some even choose at random who they will vote for, regardless of who they were supposed to choose. Which then leads to the unfair decision for however many people he or she represented ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a7b6b03b66a4,BC2333002957,"Not only does it have the unfair use of electors, but it also is much more inprecise than popular voting methods. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d7bad756eddf,BC2333002957,"While the electoral college, in total, has only a couple hundred votes, it is less rational than the millions upon millions of people across the nation wanting to vote for whoever they wish with the use of the popular vote method. In '
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong', the author explains, in paragraphs 4 and 5, how in the case of a tie in the electoral vote, that ""the Houses selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people."" Meaning that no matter what the people think, the president shall be chosen for them. And this is not the right way to elect the person designated to run the country ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dd2c2192e941,BC2333002957,"In my final point, as not to bore you with countless others, the use of popular vote has already surpassed the electoral college votes, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3cc4e22dade3,BC2333002957,"as such in the case of Nixon vs Kennedy, but has not proven enough to win the election. How is that fair, on any level? It shows how most people voted for one candidate, but then have that candidate lose because of the electoral college. Is that not reason enough, to show that people wanted a certain person as president, but because of the electoral college, didnt get as they wanted nor deserved? Not only is it shown in basic reasoning, but it is also shown in the numbers. The electoral college is an unjust way to elect presidents ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cb271fc606cf,BC2333002957,"I hope this is enough to change your view on the electoral college. It is not the fair way to let the people of this nation have the leader they want and and rightfully deserve. The use of popular vote is. It not only is a direct line of voting from the people, but all in all has a much fairer way to total the votes. A vote itself cannot possibly change from the point it is written to the point when it is accounted for, but an elector can. Don't allow this to happen the next term ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c5f8f081ec6f,BC2CAB7DB6F0,I think that you should let kids play sports even if there grade is lower than a B average. There are people that need help and it is not fair to them if they are having trouble. There are three reasons why you should let students play sports without a B average. ,Position,Effective,,,
+ee174f32e22e,BC2CAB7DB6F0,There are students who may have joined a team and is not good at most subjects. He is not able to get them all done because he may have sports practice during the evening. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+76e1b74ca795,BC2CAB7DB6F0,"This can cause someone to come home late and not have time for homework. This will cause the student to have a bad grade on his progress report or report card. There can also be times when three different classes all have a major grade assignment due and they were all due at the same date. A player might not be home enough to do the project. They might also have a game that day. If they don't do there homework they wont be able to play, but if they don't come to a game they might get kicked off the team. So having a B average is like trying to win a losing battle for someone on a sports team. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0191cf11c37f,BC2CAB7DB6F0,The next reason is that all students have a unique specialty to a certain class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+57d32a629cc3,BC2CAB7DB6F0,"They may be good at math but very bad at ELA. So if they get below a B average in that class they might get kicked off the team. Every person has his own abilities to do a certain thing or class. This is not fair to the people who are not good at everything. If they are not good at it that does not mean that they have to be kicked of the team. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+95fe5e9aca05,BC2CAB7DB6F0,some kids might need special help ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c15ec73defc3,BC2CAB7DB6F0,"If a person is having troubles in all of his classes a teacher cant only pay attention to him she has to look after the rest of the class. if they are at the back the teacher might not get to him because of all the people at the front. This way the student learns the minimum amount of knowledge he needs to pass the test or the quiz. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+360862d08af8,BC2CAB7DB6F0,This is why you should let students play sports even if they don't have a B average in every class. You shouldn't say people cant play what they want to play based on the criteria of there grades. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b5a7ee3bc763,BC73CEB66875,No it does not work because it is very un fare to the millions of voters in the U.S. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3395f791befe,BC73CEB66875,Mainly because alot of the states donot even see an ad for the presidential campaign. Also because it is not winner takes all like it is for most states. So it is not fair mainly just because of bad publicity. Also because the presidential campaign could come down to one persons vote and depending if he is bias or not it would be very unfair. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+005c6eafcc76,BC73CEB66875,The electoral college does alsonot work because it was created by our founding fathers. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dc2d0bfce9dd,BC73CEB66875,Which was all the way back when this country was first starting out. So the ways that they do it is so old and does not work anymore. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+246b53e33dad,BC73CEB66875,These are the reasons why i think that the electoral college does not work. Anymore in todays modern times where it is all out dated.    ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a54e41bb91e3,BCF95C5F4A60,"Hello my name is STUDENT_NAME, and i would like to tell you about how i feel on your new policy for sports and curriculum . ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+440bba33772e,BCF95C5F4A60,"Well many people including me have a C average as our grade. But that doesn't mean you should punish us. We very well could be failing but were trying our very hardest to not be. Many things in the curriculum are very difficult for us to grasp, and understand, but that doesn't mean we aren't trying our very hardest to get our grades up. now this is not the case for every student, but in my case it is. I am having a great deal of difficulty in math right now, and that's because we are covering an area of material that I don't fully understand. I keep trying harder and harder everyday but the formulas and numbers just don't add to me. But I have had a great grade in this class all year until we got onto this subject ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dc4a79815ac2,BCF95C5F4A60,"Many kids struggle with a subject that is difficult for them to learn. But we shouldn't punish them for it, just because they don't understand. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+09303e7b7ab7,BCF95C5F4A60,Now I can understand why you would change the policy for people who don't care about they're grade's and don't care to keep them up. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1f5e490c87f4,BCF95C5F4A60,"But for the kids that do care they're just not getting the material that we are learning, why should they be punished to. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5f0b33125a0d,BCF95C5F4A60,"Maybe being in a sport will help them learn that, if they want to stay on the sport then they have to keep they're grade's up. Also if you change the policy many students will have to leave the sport they love, and you will have not very big teams and the school would lose a lot of money. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4176acf10c0,BCF95C5F4A60,"I'm not asking you to lower the policy of the grade average but all I'm saying is, us students try our hardest everyday to do our best, But sometimes our best isn't good enough. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aee4b3b45f28,BCF95C5F4A60,why should we get punished just because we had a rough or an off week. maybe sports will help the students mature and learn that they have to keep they're grade up if they want to stay with the sport they love. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f81739efcc0,BCF95C5F4A60,please reconsider changing your policy of our grade average. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+035f6921bb71,BCF95C5F4A60,"I think that if the policy stays the same then the students, you, the school, and the district will benefit from our curriculum and sport life. ",Position,Effective,,,
+9012a5d97083,BCF95C5F4A60,"I hope you think about reconsidering, I promise you and others will benefit from leaving the policy the way it is. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+92f2f9c73d3f,BDFEDD161F03,I think they should keep the Electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8207e72b144c,BDFEDD161F03,because what's the need of changing it if it was the same way back in the day. I could be wrong but ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+680204cdb459,BDFEDD161F03,i also think many things shouldn't change like trying something different ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9130ee66d26,BDFEDD161F03,whether it's new or not. many things shouldn't change just because it feels right or it may help with your problems because 9 times out of 10 it may go all wrong when you try it but all worked out in your head perfectly. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+78cea19f100e,BDFEDD161F03,The electoral college consists of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. the electoral college consists of 538 electors but a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. And in my own personal opinion ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7fa5795e5f6,BDFEDD161F03,i think there's absoulutely nothing wrong with the electoral college i think it gives good advice and helps motivates you ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+90e76f4370f4,BDFEDD161F03,the winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates  to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+baa617082512,BDFEDD161F03,I sometimes think many people are aganist electoral college because the way it seperates the votes and only half will be required to go to the election and be seen ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+56da24f1a113,BDFEDD161F03,And others may have their opinions on this but it's ok to have your own opinion also different opinions don't hurt nobody it's just that different people believe in different things.    ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+16c407d65591,BE0B11659D82,I disagree with the fact of having a Electoral College. I don't think it would help with the elections. I think it should go the most popular votes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5f31b048c757,BE0B11659D82,"The Electoral College is not giving Florida's cizitens, like myself, a oppurnity to vote for who would be right for our state. As you may know some people call the Electoral College, a ""disaster factor"" because of the way they handle and deal with the voting. More people would want to for is right and who would do good for the state. Someone who would listen to what is needed. Not someone who just wants to make everything worst. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09bad6cee3d4,BE0B11659D82,"But, in a way it is more helpful to organize it. Make the state better, also it let's each party select a slate a electors, who are trusted to vote for the party's nomine. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+38a2cc0b51d0,BE0B11659D82,"Think about it... do you really think the electors would vote for who they are suppose to vote for? No ! They are independent, they can do whatever they want. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7436ca96c4a7,BE0B11659D82,"But, the trust is rarely betrayed. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c7735fb1dd5a,BE0B11659D82,"The Electoral College lacks of democratic pedigree. Why is that? Because of cerainty of outcome, everyone's president, swing states, big states, and avoid run off elections. They all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd25578735fa,BE0B11659D82,"My point is, is that I truly disagree with the fact of having a Electoral College. You do have some good reasons for it. But, will it help the cizitens as a whole? You have to think out us out here in the real world, not yourselves. Help make the state better by, cutting off the Electoral College and going by the most popular votes that a canidate gets. It will Florida be a sun shine again. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c481731a5d6e,BE5B1803777E,Do you believe in aliens? Do you think that aliens made The Face on Mars? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7a3edbe58a5f,BE5B1803777E,"Well let me tell you, they didn't. It resembles traits of natural landforms that we on the Earth have too. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c757c545c14b,BE5B1803777E,"Yes, I understand it's' a planet we haven't been on yet ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+d8bc684f8219,BE5B1803777E,"don't you get that, they could have perfectly normal things just like the Earth that happen every day. Do you understand now? ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+327ed53fa7f4,BE5B1803777E,"on April 5, 1998, when Mars GLobal Surveryor flew over Cydonia for the first time and the MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharer than the origina Viking photos. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+332fdb07c48b,BE5B1803777E,"It is a real landform that was caused by natural things that happen, it was no alien monument. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ba6ad3777bc2,BE5B1803777E,"It is very hard to get to the face in space because our teams have to go different places, we have to look at different things. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+373e6746b8e5,BE5B1803777E,"I see your point of view though, I get that MOC could have gotten the picture wrong ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cbc958276576,BE5B1803777E,but you see it was ten times as sharper than it had been years before. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+83633dcf1f82,BE5B1803777E,"Yes, it was cloudy to and that could have caused some major differnces comapred to when it is sunny. The ""alien markings could have been hidden by haze"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e016abb1db9c,BE5B1803777E,"you never know though, but we don't make it over the face very often, it's hard to get a better view from it. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+477b482c68f2,BE5B1803777E,"The picture could have been photoshopped to make it look different, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e3e8889945cf,BE5B1803777E,"I know its in the late ninety's but it wen tto a Jet Propulsion Lab where the face started to apppear into a face. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common arounf Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptain Pharoh. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a36bfc039efa,BE5B1803777E,"It was a good way to engage the public attraction to Mars. It became an icon in mocies, books, talk shows, it was every where for 25 years. Many scientists believed it was important to NASA and very few believed it was an alien artifact, after eighteen long years the Vikining mission was over. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e2a57800f2d,BE5B1803777E,"Do you believe me now when I say that aliens didn't create this face on Mars? It is very posible that they did but, not very likely that they did. You have to look at the facts that it might actually be a natural landform, this argument could go either way but again look at the facts and how we got a ten times sharper look at it and how Mars works, it could work the same as Earth and we don't consider Earth to have aliens on it, we don't blame aliens on our land features. Every planet is different and Mars could turn out to have storms and earthquakes and tornados just like we do on Earth, just remember that next time you think that aliens are real, look at all the facts, ALL the facts and then make your decision.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+99171837c90c,BE604A32144C,I think that yes if there was driverless cars that not just a couple people should have them everyone should ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b703481aca5b,BE604A32144C,If there was someone that did not have one of these cars they would be at a higher risk of someone wrecking. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+838cb112e4b5,BE604A32144C,The laws on speed limits would definetly change. There would be a bunch more laws besides thatone that would change as well. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d3fcee6f626c,BE604A32144C,"People would act different one the road knowing who is responsible. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a4fe1cbc8eb9,BE604A32144C,I mean if your driving one of these smart cars and someone else dosn't have one and they wrecked into you it would not be good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c88493bc791c,BE604A32144C,There would be a big debate about this and who would be to blam. The companies would have too much money so you could not sue them. Your attention would imidietly turn on the driver of the other car the company would have your back then. Those people should not have to deal with it if that is the case the company should. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f2bd1cb51bb,BE604A32144C,It would be nice for everyone to have one of these because drunk driving issues would go down. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d8ac55e93dac,BE604A32144C,"wrecks would be less common if the mechanics work on the cars they provide. Companies think to much of money so that would be the only problem. I mean sure they wold not make as much money as they would like to but people would be a lot more safe then they are. The money they make should go to the coverage of peoples cars. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f7cf9e69763,BE604A32144C,Another problem I would have with this is would you be able to get to your job on time? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd6226e062c8,BE604A32144C,If you have a certain speed limit and or if yor car stops working what are y going to do. I think that if you get this car everything should have to be covered by the compaies you buy it from. Some states are already trying to ok all of this through way higher powers than they should. They should have a system on the car that explains why your late. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1181d0604a0a,BE604A32144C,One of my last concerns is if the future generations would still know how to drive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20823ab2acb3,BE604A32144C,I mean if they don't know how the car works than what is the point of it. I think that anyone who gets one of these cars should have to take driving courses one a year for a week. They can take them any day they choose as long as it adds up to a week out of the year. The car is not the only problem think about the roads next. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b906892342b,BE694C1289EF,"Some of my friends think that community service is a great idea, but some of them think it takes up way to much time for them ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+ac9c701a8600,BE694C1289EF,I think that community service is a great way to keep our planet clean. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d7edf01faac5,BE694C1289EF,"I think I will join the rest of the elementary schools and tell them the three r rules, which are Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle. I can't believe people don't just use this rule. Some people throw there trash on the streets then we have to pick it up. I think its not fair for the rest of us that we have to pick up other peoples trash. Sometimes i think some people are disgusting at the way we treat this world. We should treat it like its our nice house. I also think that people could use the three R' s. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34f457bc921c,BE694C1289EF,If we don't keep up on the community service our family which is the world will fall apart because of the litter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8c28daff11a9,BE694C1289EF,I care for this planet and I hope there's other people out there that care to about this giant family (world). I also hope that you do the same thing that we are doing as well. For the other people that don't care at least try and help this world. I am begging you to try... Please don't let this world fall apart. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d961a631df2e,BE88F40828C4,"So to start here is a letter to my state senator, in which I argue in favor of keeping the electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0c8f2820b65b,BE88F40828C4,"The electoral college is a process, not a place. The electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors. The electoral college consists of 538 electors. In the 23 Amendment of the constitution, the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated  like a state for purposes of the electoral college. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word ""state"" also refers to the district of columbia. Next, each canidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors.
+
+The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party,but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.
+
+The president election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. Also, most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate . However, Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of ""proportion representation"".
+
+Abolishing the electoral college! But don't worry they're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore.
+
+Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college, which won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voterswould prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.
+
+Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.
+
+You might not know this so if you dont here is something very interesting for you to know. Who are the electors? Well they can be snoyone not holding public office. Here's something eles you might know, Who picks the electors in the first place? well here's the answer it depends on the state. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.
+
+The American people should consider themselces lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for must more. consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and thats those electors could always defy the will of the people. Black in 1960.
+
+Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the hose of representatives, where state deegations vote on the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c1281aa122ba,BE88F40828C4,"Okay to end my letter, my con conclustion is that this is my letter to my state seator ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a83b7f7461de,BE8F32C4B3BA,In my opinoin I think we should absolutely keep the Electoral College system. ,Position,Effective,,,
+52c7fa78c234,BE8F32C4B3BA,I think we should keep the way we elect our presidents because it's a non-democrac way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5de3cf88148,BE8F32C4B3BA,It's also easy and fast by killing two birds with one stone. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+062aab44c302,BE8F32C4B3BA,Our founding fathers compromised the Electoral system and since we can't get rid of our admendments and change the Constitution I don't tink we should get rid of the Electoral College system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01acffd8f05c,BE8F32C4B3BA,"It may be old, ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+d7a18fef7f01,BE8F32C4B3BA,new things aren't always the best things. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+112531554688,BE8F32C4B3BA,"I think if the Goverment wanted to change it they should try it on a state first before they roll it to the rest of the nation, and we all know the goverment isn't that smart and won't do it because we are their test animals. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e43f3901a128,BE8F32C4B3BA,The Electoral College System allows certainity of outcome. No run-off election because mostly likely there will be no tie. No arguing about the president being from a certain place or region so that state favors the president. Winner-takes-all system allows the people to pay close attention to the election. Swing states allow a little excitement during the election because some states like Florida you don't know which way they are going to go.  Big states also like Florida gets the president on the edge because the can loose every small state and still win with the big ones. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a59f27bfa48d,BE8F32C4B3BA,"270 votes are not a lot of votes to win an elction with, but every vote counts. Some people may not vote because there are only two parties that most of the nation only cares about the Republicans and the Democrats. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ab93671bc6d1,BE8F32C4B3BA,Some people dont like tovote in fear of their party not winning due to its unpopularity. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c7a77f97980f,BE8F32C4B3BA,But everyone should vote to express there politcal power. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e4915e8e659c,BE8F32C4B3BA,That's why we should keep it because if we change it we're changing our minds in the way vote.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+73825b8e3733,BE94CF981273,My oppinon on driverless cars is that i dont like it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cdf8f77d773b,BE94CF981273,It just makes it more easier for people to not do anything. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+045b0d5e26ec,BE94CF981273,Even drunk drivers wont get pulled over anymore because they would have that to drive them. Cops cant do their job of pulling people over anymore after they do this so cops might loose jobs cause they would have driverless cars. No one would be buyong cars anymore because of it fuel would be used half as much for it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a315919749eb,BE94CF981273,Televison and movies have been fasinated by cars that could drive their selves. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2bbba98a790c,BE94CF981273,"Under specific occasions google has had cars driving since 2009. Their cars have been driven more half a million miles without a crash. They arnt truely driverless yet they alert the driver when they need to take over the wheel when traffic is really badd or going through road work. Futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday isnt just the smart cars its smarter roads. How much smarter did the cars ned to be? in the 1980s automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. within a decade those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or rollovers. The information from the sensors could make the car apply brakes. In 2013 BMW anounced the development of traffic Jam Assitant the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph,But speacial touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. They can steer in traffic and other road construction. This necisates the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever a problem has occured. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8979940aa0c9,BE94CF981273,"Displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over something not to the drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way the In car system is actually a safety feature, and saftey is a big concern. Most driving laws focus on getting the passengers,drivers,and pedestrians safe and let know the law makers that in these cars are safety. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes benz,audi,and nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. The road to the truly autonomous car streches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+474ed5fd67e8,BECA14914CFB,"In my opinion, driverless cars are a good idea. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fd311e4fb3a4,BECA14914CFB,"Having driverless cars can help us in many ways, including preventing crashes, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e0982cc77802,BECA14914CFB,increased safety ,Claim,Effective,,,
+52aae6880363,BECA14914CFB,"However, driverless cars can also hinder us because technology can always fail, which could have catastrophic consequences. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c44332b04f9a,BECA14914CFB,"Firstly, numerous crashes can be prevented. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b61fc17df9bd,BECA14914CFB,"General Motors once created a concept car that ran on a track, therefore creating smarter roads instead of smarter drivers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+337377a66db7,BECA14914CFB,The only forseeable problem with this is that it would be extremely expensive to redo all of the roads in the country. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1079999e034c,BECA14914CFB,"Another way that crashes can be provented is by improved sensors. Google modified a Toyota Prius with many new sensors, the most important being a spinning 3-D sensor on the roof that scans the surrounding area to see the road conditions. This scanner can inform you if a car is coming at you way to fast and inform you if you need to sspeed up or slow down, or it can have the car do it for you. Both of these are adequate reasons to standardize driverless cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b9463b22438,BECA14914CFB,Another reason that driverless cars are a good idea is that they improve people's safety. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ee7f980eede4,BECA14914CFB,"As previously mentioed, the improved sensors will increase safety. There are all kinds of sensors that sense all different things such as the 3-D sensor, position estimating sensors, GPS reciever, and many more. all of these sensors can tell you if you're to close to the edge of the road, if you have a caar in your blindspot, if you're driving to fast, or to slow, the road conditions, and many other things. All of these sensors are so helpful in informing your car upon what to do to keep you and your family safe. Also, driverless cars take away distracted driving. Recently, a friend of mine recieved a text, picked up his phone to reply, and ran over a trash can. Imagine if that trash can had been a child, or a car containing you and your children. If he had a driverless car, then he would not have hit that trash can, in fact he would never run over anything again. Having driverless cars would infrease the safety factor for everyone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6d4fc2ffd317,BECA14914CFB,"On the other hand, having driverless cars could be a bad thing. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+74ce178cdf15,BECA14914CFB,"Technology could fail, leaving a catastrophic mess in its wake. The GPS system could misjudge a distance, causing the car to turn to soon, and run headlong into a building, killing people inside. Another thing is that the self-driving system could fail all together, leaving someone who doesn't know how to drive eiter stranded, or having to drive themselves. Therefore, driverless cars could be a bad thing. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+54ab4c40343b,BECA14914CFB,"
+In essence, driverless cars can be both good and bad for mankind. They can reduce the liklihood of crashing, and increase safety, but the technology can fail, and harm many people. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dc8361dc028d,BECFCA5BFABD,"Students should do community service, but community service should be done due to the goodness of someone's heart, not due to the force of someone's hand. ",Position,Effective,,,
+72dd0bf737a0,BECFCA5BFABD,What do you expect to accomplish by forcing students into work? We have child labor laws for a reason. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3f6e28ab272b,BECFCA5BFABD,"And if you try using community service as a punishment people wont listen. They wont listen, and they wont care. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+76e8ca65db7a,BECFCA5BFABD,"Now yes i understand that maybe some dictators through out history may have needed to take a step back and really see how their environment was hurting and try to change it. But why did most tyrants in history become tyrannic? As children they felt like everyone was against them, they felt closed off from everyone else, and maybe that wouldn't have happened if the home that they grew up in, and the town that they were raised in was cleaner and safer.
+
+For example look at Josef Stalin, who killed more people than Adolf Hitler. Josef had a tough childhood, he had to fight just to stay alive. He earned everything he gained. But after he became the man who had everything he started turning into the man who lost everything. Now I am not a fan of the practice of communism, but the idea of it is great. No one should be turned down due to economic problems. Everyone deserves a good opportunity.
+
+Some people just cant help if they start out with a disadvantage. But sooner or later everyone has a chance to make something of themselves.
+
+Whether their chance be a job, an education, a family, or a military service to their country. Everyone has a chance to mean something to someone. I mean isn't that what we all want, to matter? Some people have stronger drives for glory than others. Look at Achilles for instance, he wanted his name to live through the ages, and he knew that the Trojan War would help him with that. But with glory always comes retribution. Fame and demise have gone hand in hand through out history. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e01c85ac2ada,BECFCA5BFABD,"So basically what I'm trying to say is that community service is only used so that people with disadvantages should be able to acquire those advantages, but no matter where someone comes from, what race or creed they belong to, everyone is a product of their environment. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c115289d3dd2,BEF460B090E0,"The electoral college may seem like its a good idea to keep thngs going,but I think America should get rid of it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a64293f945d9,BEF460B090E0,Alote of people say its unfair. Mostly because of the winner-take-all system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebe652908975,BEF460B090E0,"If you were to vote for a presedent, you are in favor, everyone would like thier vote to be counted,right? and it is,but is it really counted towards the presedent we want to get voted for elections? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+22a5b048112a,BEF460B090E0,"According to this article, you dont really vote for the presedent you want, what you are really voting on is a state of elector, and if he gets elected he is the one who really gets to vote for the precedent ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ce18fcfe72be,BEF460B090E0,"And that is unfair, I think we should change it to popular vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5cdac3c88c2b,BEF460B090E0,We should change it to polular vote because the elecoral college is really unfair to Americas citizens. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+50dac8f4a2cc,BEF460B090E0,"Also it is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dd384e0c9f3e,BEF460B090E0,"Like I said it is unfair, outdated, and irrational,with all these things I dont think many people would like that .So I think we should change it to popular vote, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c90ac77b31c0,BEF460B090E0,"i think it would be easyier and it would be more fair,and that is what our citizens want. And that is what we should give them. After all its thier vote that counts, so lets let them decide if we should keep it the same with the electoral college or change it to some way better like by popular vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1567b08fda8f,BEF460B090E0,so according to all this information I think we should change our way of voting and flip everything around to something fair and effective. We need somthing that would make our vote count. somthing that would be fair to all of our citizens. after all its what we choose then thats what we ned to be happening. only you can prevent unfairness.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5951d6a6f73e,BF0241C10324,"
+Do you know that many students at this school have an average grade of a C?
+
+Many of these such students are athletes at this school, and some of them participate in other extra-curricular activities as well. 
+",Lead,Effective,,,
+ad730e407f21,BF0241C10324,I support the policy change of requiring students to have at least an average grade of a B in order to play sports or participate in other activities ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1050a3cf50cc,BF0241C10324,"the purpose of school is to learn and be successful, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+78e1dd3b7dc5,BF0241C10324,"time spent doing extra activities should be spent on work if they are not receiving good grades, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f91c596e2568,BF0241C10324,"being able to participate in sports and other activities should be a reward for getting good grades. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+aff1e8ed227f,BF0241C10324,"If students are not focusing on their work and only on sports and other extra activities, then they are defeating the purpose of school.
+
+Students who have a grade average of a C should focus more on learning in school before they worry about playing sports or joining other clubs at the school.
+
+If the policy was changed so that students could only participate in sports or other activities if they had a grade average of a B or higher, then you would insure that they were coming to school and learning and staying on track to becoming successful later in their lives, not just coming to school to play sports or participate in extra-curricular activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+212b05745d3f,BF0241C10324,"Students who have a grade average of a B or higher can spend time doing other activities because they are keeping up on their work and studying, they earn the right to participate in other undertakings. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+19b63b5e501b,BF0241C10324,"Being able to participate in extra-curricular activities should be an accomplishment that students have to work hard for.
+
+They should not be allowed to blow off school and their grades and still have the chance to play sports or other activities.
+
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ecd007d03e5,BF0241C10324,"In conclusion, changing the policy to participate in sports and other activities to having an average grade of a B instead of a C should be done.
+
+This would require students to have to focus on the purpose of school, learning, before anything else.
+
+Also, if students have a grade of a C, then they should have to spend the time they would use for sports or other activities to raise their grade.
+
+Finally, being able to participate in sports and other activities should be a reward for working hard and receiving good grades.
+
+As you can see, this is a policy change that should be made, as the opportunity to play sports and partake in other extra-curricular activities should be earned, not given. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+4ad5f501663e,BF295AF91B15,"I personally think that we should not have the Electoral College , because the citizens should be allowe to pick our president and vice prsident. It should be up to the people not the congress. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cd307630115f,BF295AF91B15,"According to paragraph three of source one , the Electoral College consist of five hundred and thirty-eight electors . A canidate has to earn two hundred and seventy of those votes . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d80e2739634e,BF295AF91B15,To me that is not right . Why spend time bringing these people in to vote when you have a whole state full of people who wants to have a voice in the matter. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a9d309ed76cd,BF295AF91B15,Also the congress does not know what the people want ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+865ab987eafc,BF295AF91B15,"So if you pick a canidate and he is not what the people what he may be planning to blow up the world . The citizens of the United States know what they wan in a leader and they know what they look forward to in the future . By letting congress select our president your not letting us speak for our self and that is wrong .According to paragraph fifteen of source three ,Electoral College  is widely regarded as an Anachronism and needs to bee overruled which i strongly agree with . Also in paragraph sixteen of source three, it states that citizens choose their representative and they trust them to pick the right person but that trust is often betrayed , So why would you keep having this election ? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7469d213bfa1,BF295AF91B15,Soon enough people are going to stop caring . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af6de5875a83,BF295AF91B15,"According to paragraph eleven of source two , The electoral college is a waist of time and it is not needed because people are starting not to care and are not even choosing their own canidate . They are not liking who their state chose and they dont care because state legistlatures are responsible for picking electors anyway . Some states choose two slates and send them to congress ,Like Hawaii did in 1960,Things like this is why we dont need electoral colleges . What if it happens again ? or What if there is a tie ? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a94a17b8a13,BF295AF91B15,In an electoral college every state could only cast one vote . So they have one represntative for lets say five hundred thousand voters .That doesnt make any sence at all . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ce30d311140,BF295AF91B15,"How come everyone doesnt vote for who thy want by themselves ? Maybe someone whats a president frome another state instead of their own .According to paragraph fourteen , It states that the electoral college is unfair , outdated and irrational and i agree one hundred percent . As Bob Dole Says Abolish the Electoral College . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f375a9ce5af,BF295AF91B15,"In closing i hope you will view in my favor and in everyone elses who says this type of system is old , unfair and it needs to be ruled out . ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+56507035f5a8,BF5E801B7FD6,"""i think that the principal have to considering allow student to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time ",Position,Adequate,,,
+316bc55181c0,BF5E801B7FD6,"because they have to call your parent when the school is end at 3:50"". or if you a emergency u cant call your parent ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1d496f2c623,BF5E801B7FD6,"first than all ,all kids like to have a phone but some of this kids use in the school to chat with other kids and they don't listen to the class you cant not use the phone in class if they used the teacher can giving him a detention . i think that are kids not use his phone in class. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6aa8640d564d,BF5E801B7FD6,so i agree with the principal to allow student to bring to school y case of emergency if u need you can used. so u can bring your phone and used when you finish the school. :) ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2232ddb8d452,BFB12A13E437,"Driverless cars, Whats my opionon on them, and some supporting details. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+57b07c2c1569,BFB12A13E437,"Well first off, i dont really care if they are made or not, it's not my money or time being invested or devoted into them. Now i wouldnt say they are a good idea, but i will say i think they are a really cool project and concept, and i do and know they are out there. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+6e3995900222,BFB12A13E437,"Do i see issues with cars that can guide or drive themselves? Yes, i do ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4f8713dc5e79,BFB12A13E437,"but did anyone see cruise control being a thing when it was first invented, i dont think so. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+118d15362a53,BFB12A13E437,"Some major issues i see is law suits, and such when they are invloved in a accicent, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+247652d97a93,BFB12A13E437,"such as who fault it is the driver or the computer, and what you can do if it is the computers fault. what if it kills someone? who gets blammed, and who goes to jail for the crime. What if the driver of the self guided car gets killed in a stand alone accident? Who knows. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+587e7e5b31a2,BFB12A13E437,"I also see a issue of them releasing the car, and they'er being alot of unsolved issues, fatal ones, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a3c31f1b128b,BFB12A13E437,"so i think it should go threw major and long and extensive testing, during snow conditions, dirt roads, high ways, city streets, alleys, sand, mud, tempture testing, impact testing, and long hours testing to make sure this thing is almost faultess, and insures safety for everyone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e179215a2d9,BFB12A13E437,"I also see the benefits of this car, such as allowing the driver to relax and pay attention to other obstacles, and unseen objects etc. I see it allowing cars to hold lanes better, maintain safer speeds, and stopping impacts before they happen with the right technology. i see it making a incoventent travel more convenient, and making simple life task even easier then they were. It could also cut down on the careless drivers. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+234595f12981,BFB12A13E437,"I do think it's a neat idea and a cool project that needs alot of time, and developement, but i dont wan't all human task, and responsibilties taken away. I don't wanna see the world turn into nothing, but robots, and automated machines. I want to see cool things, that are fun, and make life a little bit eaier, but still allow us to have do do things. Thats just my personal opionon.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d3b3bd4bcfeb,BFCAD70D40B7,I think the face on mars is a land form ,Position,Adequate,,,
+85881bdd86e6,BFCAD70D40B7,Only a few scientist thought it had something to do with aleins. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6207c4acdc64,BFCAD70D40B7,I tink it is a huge rock formation like said in the story. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3d58dc169b8,BFCAD70D40B7,And I also think they said whatever they could just to have the chance for tax payers. To pay to help build the rocket or rover to get pictures of mars and study the surface. And I think it it was real it would be more detailed by maybe making hair eyebrow's or mustache. And standing up. And it is two miles lonf I dont think something would do that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0293f84533ad,BFCAD70D40B7,And there is landfroms in the united states like the snake river of Idaho but we never mad that and it looks like a snake. A lave dome in a mesa is the same hight as the face of marrs also. And I dont think it would have a bunch oh holes on its forehead if it was made because usually things are made good and if they can fly a space ship to mars they have to be pretty smart. Other wise they would not be able to build it. And I alsp thought it was fake cause the other mountain by it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7fedd3fcd39,BFCAD70D40B7,So I physicaly think it would be inpossible to make soemthing that huge of a human. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c4bfdc2cd7c,BFCAD70D40B7,And I think there would be a giant hole around the face because were they needed the rock or whatever it is on mars to make the face. And its like a cloud kinda just because it looks like a bunny or dog dont mean someone made it look like one somethings just happen that way ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7157e56923e,BFCAD70D40B7,So my final opinion on this is that it is fake and noone could make this unless you had thoulsands and thoulsands of people. And nasa said after they took pitures it was just a quensedence that it looked like a humans head. I could see why people say that cause I see eyes a nose and lips. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f9ebee77bba1,BFEA78A024A9,"Dear, To whom ever it may concern I here am writing this this letter to tell you guys about the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5f4b9a761690,BFEA78A024A9,"The Electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of electorals votes by Congress. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Under the 23rd Amendmentof the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposesof the Electoral College.
+
+Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of Electors.I know the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's politicail party, but state law vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are .. Also the Presidential election is geld every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b71ef0b3defc,C02B1D9A374B,Sometimes school can be to much for a person. Students work five days out of the week. School can mentally over whelm one with a lot of work and response ability all at once. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+778f9b420f4b,C02B1D9A374B,Thats why some people think its just best to do school online in stead of in person ,Position,Adequate,,,
+57bd056d6249,C02B1D9A374B,"More hours in the day for them to relax and give students a break. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb0050894af5,C02B1D9A374B,"First, school can be a lot on students now days. They have to wake up early in the morning just for them to deal with a lot of response ability. Students will always be tested mentally to work with tons of distraction going on at school and at home. Students dont want to go through with that with they already have enough of stuff on their plate. Thats just to much for the mind and body. Just think about this; one will have their mind tested five days out of a week right? About seven students out of every ten will have to work or babysit their little siblings. Its bad enough that they wake have to wake up so early in the morning just for their minds to just be pick up and played with. Then on top of that they have to leave from school with a lot of response ability like, homework,essay,projects, and etc. Then go home to more stuff. For example, babysit, chores, and taking care of pets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1771af5a7f72,C02B1D9A374B,So its for the best if student just learn from a distance to take online class instead of going to school in person just to deal with tons of headaches ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+55d9a5010dc3,C02B1D9A374B,"Like Forest Gump once said, 'life is like a box of chocolate you will never know what your going to get.' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b56f4f7357e8,C02B1D9A374B,"Second, most of students play or want to play sports but they cant because of school taking away most of their time. once the time is gone you an never get back. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+478140cf0387,C02B1D9A374B,If students didnt have to go to school there would be a lot more time for students to have to have fun and to enjoy the young life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bd4fbc825b68,C02B1D9A374B,If students are always on their phones then it shouldnt be a problem for them to do online classes. School really doesnt give us a break the work is non stop are minds keep racing like race cars on a race track. Yeah students have two days off from the week for school but that isnt enough time It would just be for the best if student just took online classes. Their would be more free time for them to have a happy life with less stress. Who wouldnt want that? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bfe481f7cbad,C02B1D9A374B,So ask your self would it be okay with students take online classes instead of in person? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+369acecf9542,C06F7CD8DD21,"Most people are with the fact that we vote for Electoral College but unfortuntley , im not. I am in favor to change to Election by popular vote for the President of the United States. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a8b1f8197c53,C06F7CD8DD21,"voting for Electoral College dosent make sense and its completly unfair to the people voting and their is a certainty of outcome..The reason why i am against the Electoral College Vote Is cause we think were voting for the president , when were not and its confusing and it dosent make sense. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7cbff7f6d4b2,C06F7CD8DD21,"For example , In the article "" Does the Electoral College Work?"" source 1 ,pharagrapgh 15 , it states that ""Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense,"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d668757db360,C06F7CD8DD21,"when the people vote , their voting for a slate of electors. So when we vote , its actually were voting for the electors who get to vote for the president , not the people and its really unfair .Each party selects a slatetrusted to vote for the partys nominee. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41a1194f68bf,C06F7CD8DD21,"
+In addition to my previous point , the second reason why i am against the Electoral College Vote is because its not for to the people who are voting for it . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+58eb646bee5a,C06F7CD8DD21,"As it states in pharagraph 3 , because of the winner-take all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning in. For example , ""During the 2000 campaign , seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4639782be362,C06F7CD8DD21,A dispute over the outcome of Electoral College Vote is possible- ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0469e1335c38,C06F7CD8DD21,"it happened in 2000- but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. in pharagrapgh 18, it states that the reason is that the winning candidates share of the Electoral Collge is invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+aa7e8109efae,C06F7CD8DD21,"To conclude , I am against the Electoral College vote because its unfair, confusing and makes no sense ."" Its hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the Electoral College!      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+70530af4c65a,C072AE8A1572,"I believe that we should change the election to the most popular vote instead of keeping the electorial college . The Electoral College was a good idea proposed by the Founding Fauthers , But i believe that it is time to kind of switch it up. ",Position,Effective,,,
+757519c30e7d,C072AE8A1572,Changing the Election to popular vote instead of keeping the Electoral college is a much better idea if you ask me ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+835d4ada1194,C072AE8A1572,Mostly because this is a free country and we are the people of this country who have been given rights to vote for our own president . Not to vote for our own president then have the congress vote too . To me its kind of seems like you just have to question the process a little bit . At the end of all of this that president is representing the people and trying his/her best to make us happy and keep us happy. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5bceaa818326,C072AE8A1572,By the president being elected off of the electoral process it is allowing the congress to vote and having the congress vote will not put the president we won't in the chair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ed887cab7a9,C072AE8A1572,It is just basically them having controll over us they will still have the power but they just wont you to think that your getting ahead by allowing you to vote . And dont get me wrong yes the citizens vote will still count but our president is not being ellected the way we would want him to be . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+01d7108d91ac,C072AE8A1572,So i just believe that the votes should just go off of the most popular votes instead of the electoral process . That way most people won't feel cheated from their votes and like congress is ahead still this is a freedom country not a country where they make you believe your ahead and then twist things up and make you feel stumped on or cheated the president we want and vote for should be in office not a president that the citizens and the congress vote for. Which is why we should start using the Most popular vote system with only the citizens .      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a12f7822cf10,C07E3C23CE7B,I think we should keep the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+34446495ef86,C07E3C23CE7B,"be cause people can vote on electors and  not the actual presedent they want to win for the vote because people think he or she may or may not be the best person to be for that job we should keep the electoral college for reasons like not haveing to pick or choose for the  better person. To be if the both want kinda the same thing,it would help the people not the presedent it only gets them votes and votes are nouthing to me or others. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0666d312e4be,C07E3C23CE7B,2. second i think we should keep it beacuse you can tell who voted and not the people that voted ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8b95f9e4e8a1,C07E3C23CE7B,because you get a sticker that said i voted so that puts an place that you have voted or not and if u dont u have some time to do it or there will be anourther person who takes and votes in ur place and u wont be able to vote ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4d450001aa0b,C07E3C23CE7B,"3. because the ballet things are full and the time is up for them to vote ,so they have to wait till the next time to vote is ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+941d8141d590,C07E3C23CE7B,ansd that will be the next year so useing the electoral collage  will allow u to be able to vote on time and mnot miss be ing able to vote becaus evoting is im portant to the county or the contonet to be counted on not only you but others around so u can have a choice of what you want to have as a presedent of the united states ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b54ae4662cac,C07E3C23CE7B,4. third haveingf the electoral college will help tho ones who cant get out to vote ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+75c3c732ff01,C07E3C23CE7B,and be able to do it just about any wear your at and that will be help full to me and othere because im nort allowed to vote yet so it comes in handy in many ways to us and other people to ther united states ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+28cc4dd7b4e5,C086B02B3B90,"Have you ever believed something that wasn't true? I have, but before you believe it you have to find out if it's true or not. In the article it says the ""face"" looks like it could have been a Martian mesa. Also the shadows and the lighting could be making it look more like a face. There for if the NASA wanted to go there to get evidence it would cost them a huge budget. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d70499e4f4bf,C086B02B3B90,"What if the ""face"" was a Martian mesa? It could be one. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e9902ac65cb5,C086B02B3B90,"The NASA was watching it through the years and figured out it looked like it could be a Martian mesa or butte. It was also very common to see Martians around the Cydonia, just this one had unusual shadows that made it look different from the other ones ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+351e6eac8a37,C086B02B3B90,. It could all just be a natural landform that looks like a face. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a74c450ba6c8,C086B02B3B90,The shadows could be making the Martian look like a face ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13053e0f900b,C086B02B3B90,"From the angle where they took the picture. The picture could have changed how the picture came out. The human mind can form shandows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. Some people said it would be a good way to engage the people and attract attention to Mars. Some people can just be fooled by them and thinking it really is a face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e66cc8e20e39,C086B02B3B90,To get evidence from Mars to see if it is really a face would cost NASA a huge budget. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+24c9038817e1,C086B02B3B90,"Just to go to Mars is a lot, but to go there and get evidence from there and bring it to Earth is a lot. It also can effect the way back to Earth and be dangerous. They don't stop at Cydonia so they would have to plan it out and get all the supplies they would need to get there and get the evidence they need. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c219d7fa5128,C086B02B3B90,"People will believe almost anything anyone says. You just got to have evidence to know if it's true or not. There are so many things to make the Martian look like a face. Like meteriods could of hit it and knock off a piece of it. They could of just got the wrong side, lighting, or shadows of it ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f82eaa728e89,C0AC393B1DC9,I think we should just have only a C or above to be able to go out for sports or other activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f618efa06a6e,C0AC393B1DC9,I think this because if most students have a C then the team will have less people to support the team ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+195b5d89dd40,C0AC393B1DC9,if you don't have a lot of people on the team then the less the chance of that sport being able to compete. Also the less the people on the team the less chances of people going out for sports and not being able to do it. If they don't have many people with a B then they won't be able to do different activities or sports that they want to do. Plus the less people on the team the less chance the team will win. If everyone had a C then there wouldn't be anyone to be on the team and if nobody is on the team then the school won't be able to go out and verse other people. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7bb67970179c,C0AC393B1DC9,If the kids can't verse the less experience they will have for the future when they do get good grades to play sports. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+edfc36c75564,C0AC393B1DC9,If the students have less experience then when they go to collage and join a sport they won't have a clue on how to play. If they don't know how to play then they won't make the team. If they don't make the team then they would be upset and could blame it on the school they went to. If they do that it would make the school look bad. Also the more experience that we have the better we will learn. If students could only have C and up to play they will have a better chance of getting into a good collage and joining a sport and getting to be on the team. Also it wouldn't be fair to the students to not be able to play sports and get a good scholarship to a sports collage and learn even more about the sport then they did when they where in school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ecd24b455b1d,C0AC393B1DC9,if the students cant play sports and most people have C then there wont be to many people to go out for the team and then the coaches will barley have a team to have represent the school and hopefully win and put a good name to the school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5513b6cc5a30,C0AC393B1DC9,Then their parents could be proud of them for how good they did on that sport. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f79812d42729,C0AC393B1DC9,"You should really consider these possibilities for the students future and how it would impact them when they go to collage, get a job, and have a family. I think you should only have people who have D's or below to not be able to play sports, but let the people who have a C and up be able to play sports. Just remember these ideas and how it could impact the future of those students and how they will live the rest of there lives wonder how to play that sport and teach there kid to learn that sport, but they wouldn't be able to do that if you do not change the grades to have them play sports cause of a grade rule that you put up. So let those kids with a C average play sports. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+99e6c0e501fe,C0AC797246EE,I will like to argue about the Electoral College. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+82637214c373,C0AC797246EE,"The voters vote for the presidant,but they are just voting for a slate of electors that they can elect the presidant ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5b233f7bed17,C0AC797246EE,They are called disaster factor ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3931437a1147,C0AC797246EE,"The disaster factor got the name from the 2000 fiasco.The question we are all worrying about is what if it happened again?We dont want to go through it again,we might not get lucky as we did from the 2000 fiasco. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a372c1451e3,C0AC797246EE,"What if we have an electoral tie like in 1968.There was 41,971 votes that could of gotten deadlocked the election ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ec10113d2ff6,C0AC797246EE,Its unfair for us voters because of the winner-takes-all system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+054e0973eba6,C0AC797246EE,Candidates don't spend time in states of them knowing there is no chance of winning.We need to put fate of the presidency in the hands of swing voters.There isn't alot of basis in reality. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2c44637fd7d,C0AC797246EE,It's against direct elections that are spurious ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+adfdb4e42a87,C0AC797246EE,We need to go with Bob Doyle accusation of that we need to abolish the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+418419697fd5,C0AC797246EE,"Everybody is arguing about the Electoral College.Everybody thinks its unfair,outdated,and irrational ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e180136f67b9,C0AC797246EE,Let's change the Electoral College by making it better for us and Congress. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+717750cd9a7b,C0BA22AD7F2A,"Why should people who be qualified be only able to vote? Voting should be for everyone, not such as anyone like as in Gang related people or people who are in prison but you get the point. This '' Electoral College '' experiment that they already have been going on is just something that they can use to get more time to think out what their next move is. They way certaint people, like me, see things like if the One out of the other person who is running for President and his votes come back with such little insufficient votes like 87% to 89.5% the should continue the vote and the show must continue! Even though the ''Electoral College'' seems like just a waste of time, does it even work? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+56c90902345a,C0BA22AD7F2A,"Electoral College doesn't really prove anything because some people won votes and lost the presidency,thanks to electoral college. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e4383c7edbc2,C0BA22AD7F2A,"Due to the elctoral college system, voters vote not for the president but just for the slate of electors, who then turn elect the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5619e1dd708f,C0BA2FA545DC,"Community work never hurts, Its something that would be good for our school. ",Position,Effective,,,
+51f7548ef715,C0BA2FA545DC,It s something that others will appreciate and when your done not just make you feel good because you helped someone but also make the ones you helped feel good. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e7ba2c7fe2ac,C0BA2FA545DC,Some may say that's its a waste of time and they could be out having fun with there friends or going to parties and what not. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0d25f3e479db,C0BA2FA545DC,But if they never know the feeling of accomplishment when it comes to that. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+39df6fdbcf57,C0BA2FA545DC,"Have you ever went to the store and seem teens walking around in there PJs? And its 12 noon and you wonder '' well they sould be doing something better than that.'' I have and being a teen i have done it, and im not saying that all teens do it or its a bad thing im just saying they could be doing something better with there time like helping elders and if they don't think that's cool they could go to the park and clean it up, so they could hang there with there friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5c3cd328ffb,C0BA2FA545DC,It would kids off the streets hanging out and putting them to do something useful. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+813377506ed6,C0BA2FA545DC,Have you ever wondered why most of the parks are dirty of why you don't really see students helping out there community? Well that's because you give them a choice to ether do community service or not to. If there lazy of course there going to pick not to due to the fact they don't want to go. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+780ac61bb854,C0BA2FA545DC,But if they had to go more things would get done around the town because they would be helping. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+49bfa7f6300b,C0BA2FA545DC,"They would go clean parks, help the elder, little kids at schools, soup kitchens for the poor and many more. Its could really make a change to our community. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3b7f6fadb2f7,C0BA2FA545DC,"When you get older in life and you need a job or you want this collage to want you, then having community service will look good on your application for the collage/job ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6aa63645e22f,C0BA2FA545DC,"and they will think ''Well they seem to care about there town to help out this much '' and by them knowing that you did this to help you will look good to them. Which in the long shot you will look better, then some of the others. Not just helping you out with collage or a job but skills in life. You might have learned something while doing your community service that helps you out when in a tough predicament that you come across. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2258ba34edb6,C0BA2FA545DC,I did community service a couple of times and i certainly learned new skills. I helped out elder and cleaned beaches it was fun to me and I believe that it would be good for our school to require community service not just for the town and people but for themselves to feel personal pride in that they did for there community and themselves. It would be a great thing to do for our school. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e1593224e3aa,C0E55316F183,Electoral College is defined as a process. The Electoral college was founded by the founding fathers with the Constitution as an agreement between election of the president and by the popular vote of qulaified citizens. imsure you already know all of this ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c22b10cba1df,C0E55316F183,therefore i am here to inform you why Electoral College shouldnt be kept and popular vote should win ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6d00e6033234,C0E55316F183,This is the citizens country so why should we have a leader that we dont even like? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a5f30c86f6fb,C0E55316F183,We all have the right of speech and of speeking for what we believe in ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e220520fde07,C0E55316F183,Last but not least why would the Electoral College get to choose our choice for us? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fa60c4b7d32,C0E55316F183,"The United Sates is an independant country , therefore we should have the majority of the say in who we want to lead our country ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d5df08b83d8,C0E55316F183,"say you're at a restraunt and they ask what you want on your hamburger your not just going to tell them to put what ever they want on it because then you wont like it, same situation just not with food. why would you want to live in a world with a leader you dont like, making choices you dont like eighter, everyone obviously wounldnt get their first choice because there has to be a winner and a loser. even if you lose thats better to say that you got a chance to say what you wanted it just didnt follow through. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fe367d2efa45,C0E55316F183,We also all have the right of speech in the United States. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4a878984192e,C0E55316F183,"What i mean by this is, we were all given a mouth by God for a reason. ""A closed mouth wont get fed"" so how would a closed mouth country get the correct leader they wanted? exactly they couldnt thats my point. if we speek were going to get a chance of getting more thought of when the decision is made, so if we were to all speek up the decision would be in our favor. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2eadf17b7c8b,C0E55316F183,"We all have a choice for diffrent things, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8e60bdb16b52,C0E55316F183,"some people like peanut butter, some people dont like peanut butter, some people are alergic to peanut butter. so say you hate peanut butter and you told the waitress your order and she said no youre getting a peanut butter sandwhich, you, hatin peanut butter, obviosuly wouldnt like that at all. Same sitauation here. Why would they let you say your choice in what you want then just tell you what youre going to get? its just not right and dsent add up. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8ef1d541cbca,C0E55316F183,"Therefore i am a firm believer that it should be popular vote not by electoral college, and if you dont beliee that well you are making the wrong choice and letting other people make the choice up and speek for you. Use your voice. You dont have it for just no reason at all.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+42f760aa4746,C105434DA2CA,"''The electoral college is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.' ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+dea610d159b2,C105434DA2CA,The Electoral College is one of the most fair systems our society has set up ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d1e63e576e70,C105434DA2CA,This process is fair and essential because it is is not the only determination ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b60d5acd5c0,C105434DA2CA,each state gets the correct amount of power ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad24f7f3e9c9,C105434DA2CA,it shows a clear winner ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8df19c77b113,C105434DA2CA,The Electoral College does is not fully responsible for the outcome of the decision for our President. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a167d4b58f8f,C105434DA2CA,"In the year 2000, this was proved, Gore had received more popular votes than Bush, yet fewer electoral votes. ''It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.'' The section of the nation that believes the Electoral College is unfair believes this because they assume all the power is in this system's hands ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+4a2675b800e5,C105434DA2CA,"Yet they are mistaken because clearly our popular vote can override this system if necessary. Though it is very rare most will argue, the fact that it is possible to not allow the Electoral College to take control of our government proves that the power is really all in the hands of the citizens. Clearly, the ''unfair'' picture most perceive is largely mistaken ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6d330bfbf337,C105434DA2CA,"The sizes of states in our country widely varies. From Rhode Island to Texas, we have power in Congress. It would simply not be fair if our small states had the same amout of power as our larger states. California has more of a population, therefore should have more say in Congress, than New Jersey. ''Your states entitles allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation; one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators.'' Just the way this is set up in Congress, the same amount of power for each state is applied for choosing our President for the next four years. This is only fair to the population of America and equal representation in all the sections of congress would be unfair to the larger states that obviously require and deserve more power than the smaller states in the United States. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3d3f120ff05,C105434DA2CA,"Basically, power is fairly given to each state under the Electoral College. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73788f2ec8f6,C105434DA2CA,"''The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast.'' Though this situation is rare, in 1968 when Nixon ran against Clinton, both had a total of 43 percent of the popular votes. Yet, because of the Electoral College, a clear winner was shown. If ever in case of this event, this ''pressure'' can complicate and make the choosing of the President way more difficult than it was planned to be. For this reason, our Electoral College sets up a way to take care of this if it was to happen again. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+98ce59186df3,C105434DA2CA,"the Electoral College shows a clear winner and takes out any confusion or problems that could arise. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+62229025e760,C105434DA2CA,"To conclude, our country is based off of fair rules and systems, one of them being the Electoral College. It is fair because it does not have full power, the right amount of power is applied to each state, and it produces a clear winner. ''Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an electio.''    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0bf187e21abe,C10C521A47C3,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming,"" the author presents both the positive and the negative aspects of driverless cars. Therefore, the author never takes a side on the matter. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+9db6d2d8b862,C10C521A47C3,This response will side with the argument of being against driverless cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8c0d9625c526,C10C521A47C3,driverless cars promote less disciplined actions with not only adults but with teen drivers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a7d93fc7cda6,C10C521A47C3,"automated cars would not benefit the economy, it would damage it even further ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a19dc397133a,C10C521A47C3,automated cars put safety features at risk compared to having an abled-human to do the driving functions manually. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d083e26ae23,C10C521A47C3,Driverless cars can promote less disciplined actions among teen and adult drivers ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba9d3f7bc7ac,C10C521A47C3,"This assumption is made because, driving under the influence, as well as underage drinking are huge topics of discussion in today's society. Driverless cars would give these two groups of people an exscuse to commit these actions. They would no longer have to worry about the reproccutions of such crimes. Such as putting other's lives in danger or getting caught by the police. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+95c58c051ae7,C10C521A47C3,Automated cars would not benefit the economy in any way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7f5ebe926cdd,C10C521A47C3,"In fact, the cars could worsen the already bad financial situation America faces now. This is because of the following quote from the article. ""Originally, many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads."" ""These smart-road systems worked suprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical."" These direct quotes further express to society that these automated cars require very new, very expensive roads. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87013b646a0a,C10C521A47C3,driverless cars put saftey features at risk compared to having an able-bodied human to do the functions instead ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18ec80393ec8,C10C521A47C3,"""Most driving laws focus on kepping drivers, passnegers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers."" This quote speaks entirely for itself. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9a06c794e29,C10C521A47C3,"the best option for society is to not have driverless cars because, they promote less disciplined actions with teen and adult drivers, they would not benefit the economy, and finally these driverless cars put safety features at risk compared to having an able-bodied human to do the manual functions when presented them. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+206364b3c1a4,C133EB596A40,The face on Mars was actually landform on mars and not a face ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3c51a5994e5e,C133EB596A40,if you still don't believe me I'll tell you some facts ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c568f16b65a,C133EB596A40,"In 1976 viking 1 was snapping pictures so that viking 2 could land while doing that it snapped a picture of a landform that looked like a face. Many people thought that it was a face but it wasn't. In 1998 they took another pivture but this time it didn't look like a face it looked more like a landform on the ground. Many people thought that the landform was created by aliens many others thought that it was made just like land forms on earth. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12f821a9a353,C133EB596A40,People still thought thet they were made by aliens many other people disagreed on it ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cc7e65519076,C133EB596A40,until 2001 when they took the final picture and they saw that it was actually a landform Garvin said that it reminded he of snake river of Idaho. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dc28edb6be43,C133EB596A40,So after that happened mny people saw the truth about the face on mars and completely forgot about it. Some people still believe and talk about it but maybe those people are just the scientists trying to find out if there is more land forms that look just like the onein 1976. Many people say that they might find another one and start the arguement that it's an alien artifact or that it's just a land mass this time. Many other people study about this things and think they find out the truth about ehy this landforms look like faces. Even though some people think there is life on mars some might be true and some of it might be fake. Some people think there is aliens but maybe in another galaxy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12c9ae107837,C133EB596A40,"Many people might still think that mars landform was a sign form aliens and saying that they exist personally I don't think there is aliens in mars or any other planet in our solar system. That was just my idea about it I don't think my statement could be true. Maybe smart kid like a nerd would say "" scientists who are studying this kind of martian studies could get results of a real life alien that could be roaming around earth"". That's what I would think a nerd would say or maybe he might just say it even smarter than I said it, but that is my opinion I would like to hear about more peoples opinions on the face on mars. Even though many other people will just argue over that it was a face but maybe the aliens destroyed it or just abducted it like they do in boring fake movies of aliens but that's my opinion not you if you don't agree with me it's fine with me.   ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+386dd4f0d0c0,C13F7CD75B84,I am certain that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3292ee6f83fd,C13F7CD75B84,"It has many features, and it has many people concerned about it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce3c6cd615f2,C13F7CD75B84,"The Face on Mars is a natural landform because it was spotted with shadowy likeness of a human, it resembles the human head, and it actually shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. 
+",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+086eabf92b5c,C13F7CD75B84,"This face has many features, including its shadowy likeness of a human. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1729bf08b34d,C13F7CD75B84,"Just twenty-five years ago, something happened that was so hilarious. NASA's Viking one spacecraft were traveling around Mars, then it was spotted looking such as a human. It seemed to them that the face was just starring, just as if it was real. This suprised many of the analyzers.
+
+After many experiments on the Face, they discovered that it is a resemblance of a human head. It is just like an illusion, of eyes, a nose, and even a mouth ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a91a8ab5ac4a,C13F7CD75B84,According to some authors it would be a great way to engage the public and bring some attention to Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1a5a6b34354,C13F7CD75B84,"They finally realized that is has brung some attention! After that hilarious day it was featured in many magazines, books, and etc. This is a enormous way of saying that this face is very engaging and concerning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5d1852a7c00,C13F7CD75B84,"According to Mars Global Surveyor, they flew over Cydonia and snapped a picture of the original Viking photos. The pictures showed that it was an actual natural landform. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+417cc195411e,C13F7CD75B84,"It wasn't appeared to be an alien monument after all this researching. Even after this stage, people still weren't satisfied with the evidence that they had came up with.
+
+The Face shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. After taking time and time again to review the face, it seems to just show a Martian that is equivalent to a butte or messa. "" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, "" says Garvin. Which is a dome with lava that is in the form of a set apart messa, but is the same height of the Face. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21150ddba843,C13F7CD75B84,"As a result, the Face is a natural landform. It has a shadowy likeness of a human, it resembles the human head, and it shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. Research has shown that this isn't just an alien monument after all. There can be more thinking to this, can it? Its just a natural landform, which shows a Martian to represent Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+58418d8e494f,C1CC3C045CCB,"I have heard of your potential decision to require community service from all students. (I am assuming that the students we are referring to are older than elementary school age.)
+
+The details of the requirement have not yet been released to us yet, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4f72dbcdd4e8,C1CC3C045CCB,"if the time you require is more than six hours a week, I oppose the decision to make it an obligation. I do not think that students should be made to do this. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+64517e41f35d,C1CC3C045CCB,"The choice to perform a service for the community is definitely one that should be encouraged, but should remain a choice. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e6b02caf5f9,C1CC3C045CCB,"The reason I think this is because many students have other responsibilities they must use the time to do. If you require them to do community service, their other responsibilities will have to be put on hold until they can get back to them. Some of their activities that they need the time to do may be personal, for example, visiting a sick relative. Others are for their education, like going to an internship (for high school aged students). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2de3fc6cfe76,C1CC3C045CCB,"Either way, this decision will affect how your students will have to manage their schedules after school hours. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ed6592e4ce9a,C1D354F07E03,"It's the Tuesday after the first Monday in November, can you guess what it is? It's election day! Every four years, nearly every person in America will vote to choose a new President, or do we? Yes, we live in a democracy where we can vote for who runs out country, but do we really make the descision? The Electoral College is a phase where electors, of a candidate running for president, come together and decide for who is the President, Vice President, and include the countings of the electoral votes from Congress. The person who runs for President has a select group of people known as electors, which are typically chosen by that person's political party ",Lead,Effective,,,
+580d8a9ba308,C1D354F07E03,"Is this who we really vote for, and is it fair? This should be eradicated. ",Position,Effective,,,
+ea0586cacc25,C1D354F07E03,"By using the Electoral College, we don't directly vote for our own President. We vote for his/her's electors. It's them who really choose who leads us, not us ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8d8081c0dc55,C1D354F07E03,"In ""What Is the Electoral College?"" it states that ""...when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors,"" meaning we aren't actually voting for a President, just his/her's electors. It could literally be anybody, not holding public office. This is not a direct way for us to vote for who makes the descisions around here. In ""Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" it claims that ""...over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" Sixty percent said that! That's incredible. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+92a67da2b428,C1D354F07E03,The electoral votes are just unequal ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0af6bdd2eef7,C1D354F07E03,"The states that are bigger would obviously get more electoral votes than, let's say Maryland. California would have more votes than Maryland because it i smuch bigger. The House of Represenatives has its own unique way of handling that, and they're going just fine, we don't need another. It just isn't reliable, the numbers and percentages would be all boggled up. This country is based on equality and liberty. and there is no equality in this. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f7c29fb4e78,C1D354F07E03,The Electoral College is much too confusing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63ee943eb6ea,C1D354F07E03,"Sometimes voters could be discombabulated about who it is they are voting for. Sometimes voters can't control who the electors vote for. This is both confusing and frustrating for anyone who thinks they voted for someone great, but the electors change that. In ""Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,"" it says that ""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."", meaning that we don't choose for ourselves, they do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c17c86998aec,C1D354F07E03,"Some could say ""its anarchy"", or that ""its not democratic"", which could be true ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+898e6c38a07c,C1D354F07E03,"In ""In defense of the Electoral College...,"" it states that ""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee...however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote."" This means that even though you vote for a person, it's probably a fifty-fifty chance your person will win ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3471f9c78bb1,C1D354F07E03,"It does also help release the stress of worrying about a run-off election, and avoids the problem where no candidate receives a majority of votes that has been cast. 
+",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a930ec51d4f6,C1D354F07E03,"The Electoral College is not the best way to vote in our beautiful country. It can be decieving and confusing. Though it may have one or two advantages, the list of things that can go wrong with it are of plenty. It is unfair, and could turn nasty. It should be abolished. Make America more equal.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8fe3ee9cd5b7,C20C1032FA1C,"I am thinking about the policies for using cell phones at school. Since many students are using phones, they will of course want to use it at school. I surely know that all of the students would want Policy One, since it enables them to use their cell phones at break time. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+22073db4efa0,C20C1032FA1C,"That will mean there will be a less amount of phones being taken away during class, because they spent the time using their phones at break. Of course, the students cannot use their phones during class. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2e2fafa9ff2e,C20C1032FA1C,I would agree with Policy One. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d409ddb441a,C20C1032FA1C,"Using cell phones at break would decrease the amount of students using cell phones in class, since they used their break time to use it ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ac9847af0442,C20C1032FA1C,"That will lead to a decreasing number phones being taken away, and also a decreasing number of referrals and detention. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1db5114c5a9c,C20C1032FA1C,Letting the students using their cell phone during break and lunch time will lower the chance of fights. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c71fa1147aa7,C20C1032FA1C,"It also could make the voice level go down, which will be a relief to the yard duties and other teachers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09dd44643b4e,C20C1032FA1C,"I know Policy One will work for the students and staff, because if you don't let the students use their phone, they will try any single way, and use any spare time during classes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+538ac97d53ce,C20C1032FA1C,That would end up in disaster ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+42e9ff297ae4,C20C1032FA1C,"All of the students in this school will enjoy the time you will enable them to use their phones, and the school will be a happier place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4e86a7422d6e,C23BD7FF7DD7,"The electoral collage is a founding fathers established in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote. There are consis of 588 electory and majority of 270 electory votes is required elect the president. So there for electors generally choose by candidates political partys. Presidential election is held every four years but it on a Tuesday after the first monday.
+
+whoever  you have choosen the states elector you would be  really be voting for your next president .
+
+How that works is when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate elector.
+
+And who ever has the most votes the winner ""takes it all"" type of sytem to the winning presidential candidates.
+
+After the elcetion has ended your governor takes it time for the ""centificate of Ascertaniment"" for all the candidact ran for the preisdent . Also for the Centificate of Ascertaniment makes it in your state and shows which electors will represent your state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3fe1ecbfbff2,C23BD7FF7DD7,"Richard N, jimmy C , and Bob D the u. s chamber of comerce were clearing the eletoral collage why they were thinking about doing this is beacuase many people argreed with them and told them they should beacause it wasnt right ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+de0b668ec66a,C23BD7FF7DD7,So those are the some things that the elector candidates say about the whole procces       ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+071141b13a89,C25E3A9AA408,a more options for estudent that cant go to school on morning they can go on the asfer nuon or they can home classes or vidio confedensil. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8bda451cbf48,C25E3A9AA408,disten lornin is a good idia because no all the time wi can go aut sayd or have the mauch time but tha is a good idia ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ba8bd8c6522d,C25E3A9AA408,that is i good idia that we can have to vidio chat for a classes. yes student will benefis for that promgran because not all student can go hay have to work to help der parents. but some wish that they can go to scholl but on the same time he now that thay can not go ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+92598f110261,C25E3A9AA408,i wist we can help all the world for the little children can go to school they will me so happy ther dreem cambe real what day wish to du or gohave dome for demen that is all forme thank you.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+1d114e4bf178,C270B9B6107C,Dear senator The Electoral College process should be changed ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00c47ef65cab,C270B9B6107C,"this is the rule of it process consists of the selection of the selection of the electors the meetion of the elecctors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. I personally thinck that that is not that smart of a rule,because the president would propally say that he would do all of this stuff saying that we do not have to pay taxes and stuff trying to convince us to vote for him by lying to us. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+289e033227df,C270B9B6107C,As well as other presidents could be telling the truth and saying all of this stuff saying that one day they will make people stop paying taxes and poeople right away will thinck ohhh yess no taxes lets vote for this guy wile really they can do that but they will rise the prices on everything and then people will get mad agian. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b8b3d3bc97cb,C270B9B6107C,I thinck that the president should not talk to everyone one by one because then that would be just way to long and tireing. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+159207fbccf8,C270B9B6107C,As well as the person could just decide to bribe everyone. thoes are all just one reason that i thinck we should change the rule. There are also some good parts about it everyone will be able to hear the president talk instead of having to hear him through tv and people making adiou changes or people hearing their tv wrong or people haveing their tv volume to low ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+874f3180668a,C270B9B6107C,"''And that is all i have to say about that"".    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9d6c4e3d769c,C28B8FFF66DE,"electoral college is a process that consists of selecting electors,meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f352e59fcb2c,C28B8FFF66DE,electoral college should not be changed to election. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f929b673c6eb,C28B8FFF66DE,"electoral college should be kept because it will help save the tress by saving paper, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+edfbc8617c75,C28B8FFF66DE,one wouldnt have to go anywhere because the electoral college is not a place ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a97694ac4303,C28B8FFF66DE,because there are 5 different methods of choosing the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cbe0dea8d6da,C28B8FFF66DE,saving paper is extremely important. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1beaa64ce251,C28B8FFF66DE,"paper comes from trees and many animals and wild life have homes in trees. with electoral college one wouldnt need paper to vote, which is a paper saver. the electoral college helps a lot when it comes to selecting electors,metting of the electors and where they wil vote for the president, and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. by saving gas one is saving money which can be used for any nessessitites. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+65aaa6f39a77,C28B8FFF66DE,"gas now a days is extremely expensive,but with the electoral college one would be saving money because the electoral college is a process, not a place, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dcc7636873d1,C28B8FFF66DE,"it doesnt require one to travel anywhere,whch saves gas and money. with the oney saved one can buy the nessessities that are needed. the electoral college offers a lot by just being a process. it helps save paper and money,whch is good for wild life and humans. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1e346af87f43,C28B8FFF66DE,"the first method is that certainty of outcome.. it states that a dispute over the outcome of an elecotral college vote is possible and it happened in 2000,but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. a winning candidats share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. for example, in the elections that happened in 2012, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney, b ecause almsot all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis,ev en a very slight. method number 2 is everyone's president. the electoral college requires a presidental candidate to have trans-regional appeal. no region(south,northeast,etc)has eneough electoral votes to elect a president. method 3 is swing states. the winner-take all method  of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates-as we saw in 2012's election-to focus their campain efforts on the toss-up states. voters in toss-up states are more likely to poay more attention to the campain-to really listen to the competing candidates, knowing that they are gouing to decide the election. method 4 is big states. the electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population0 losy by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the consitutuion. mthod 5 is avoid run-off elections. the electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+48c405a24e2c,C28B8FFF66DE,"Mr. senate you should keep electoral ollege because it saves paper,saves gas and because it shows us the 5 methods that should be used for choosing the president. the electoral college offers a lot to wild life and also to humans by savikng trees and gas, which saves us humans money that one can spend on nessessities.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+acb467f9801d,C2A49B846D05,"Every four years, citizens of the United States ages eighteen and up, gather at local voting locations to elect the President, our government leader. From Washington to Obama we have always elected our leaders as such. The Constitution has given us our way to vote- the Electoral College. This process, of course, consists of our 538 electors, the place where they meet to vote, and the counting of said votes. But how effective is this process? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+21bcee357791,C2A49B846D05,I believe the Electoral College should be diminished. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e799d93ede0f,C2A49B846D05,Statistics show that direct voting is preferred by the majority of the citizens in the U.S. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+535034d1201f,C2A49B846D05,"According to a poll taken in 2000, 60% of voters would rather direct voting over the current system. With the current ""
+
+winner-take-all
+
+"" concept in most all states except Maine and Nebraska, many people find that even if 45% of all the votes in the state are for one party, all of the votes go to the opposition. Citizens may as well not even vote under this standard if they wont even be represented. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4fd175e18f89,C2A49B846D05,"Although not one vote will decide an election if we had direct voting, many single votes can. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+73152d0623f5,C2A49B846D05,"Take the 1.4 out of 3 million people in California who voted one way and got all their votes thrown the other because of the other 1.6 million people. With that 1.4 million, mixed with tons of thousands of voters, one party may actually win the election rather then the canidate who would have won with the Electoral College process. For example, in 2000, George W. Bush won the election and most of the Electoral College votes. However ,
+
+Al Gore got the most individual votes. How can that be fair at all? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f99ff3962f40,C2A49B846D05,"When ""we the people"" vote for the president, we are not actually doing what we have come to believe. In reality, we are actually voting for representatives called
+
+Electors to vote for the canidate. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fe74e1e32503,C2A49B846D05,"These electors cast their vote depending on the votes that we (you and I), cast. These electors that we choose are generally very trustworthy and reliable, being the reasons we choose these government officials to elect our government leaders. Sadly, however, not everybody is who they say they are, as we all have flaws and sins; occasionally one of these electors will be unfaithful and vote for the canidate they deem fit, instead of who we have chosen ourselves. Although this is rare, the possibilities would be negated completely if we simply had direct, individual voting. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2e48597a8be1,C2A49B846D05,"To wrap up, I vote that we abolish the Electoral College and allow the citizens of the United States to vote for ourselves. It would make the majorty of the U.S. happier, it will make us better represented, and we will be directly electing our own government officials. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+325884a242e7,C2BAF4ADA2CA,I am in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the election of the president of the United States. Over sixty percent of voters prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. I believe this change would make electing a president much more simple ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6fa171a95540,C2BAF4ADA2CA,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f86f98905ade,C2BAF4ADA2CA,This is because of the winner-take-all system in each state ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+30ce5e38f5db,C2BAF4ADA2CA,"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b084881b0c18,C2BAF4ADA2CA,Most  counterclaims to my explanation is swing states ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+aac5532f358f,C2BAF4ADA2CA,"This is because voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign, knowing that they are going to decide the outcome of the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d713b758e435,C2BAF4ADA2CA,"Keeping electoral colleges would help in this case, so the candidates have to make both want to vote for them (Electoral College and toss-up states) ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aac4beb0e9c8,C2BAF4ADA2CA,Keeping Electoral Colleges also restores some of the weight in the politicaal balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fde3d3f3da52,C2BAF4ADA2CA,"In conclusion, I think the electoral college should be abolished. By doing this, we could avoid electoral ties, and the ""disaster factor''. We can also be more fair and rational to voters. These are the reasons I would like abolish the Electoral college.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+23485ffd9e76,C2DB3C695BCF,My argument for the development of the driverless cars is that we should have them. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54edee14869f,C2DB3C695BCF,they can become really helpful to people ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+69974af4cb8d,C2DB3C695BCF,They can also provide really good safety features. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff4671abc935,C2DB3C695BCF,"The diverless car will help the environment, it will spend less of our natrual resources that we use ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3528455ca459,C2DB3C695BCF,These cars will change the way our future will look like. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3da6639207f3,C2DB3C695BCF,the diverless cars will help tons of people around the world. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+17c37d269e8f,C2DB3C695BCF,"Think of all the handicap people on this earth who can't drive. These cars will change their lives. They can travel by their selfs, instead of people picking them up to go places. There might be people who become drunk or injured and they need to go to their house or hopistal. With these cars they can get there. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5a2e178fcb6,C2DB3C695BCF,the driverless car can provide really good safety features. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+790d60046d18,C2DB3C695BCF,"The cars will have a lot of sensors. When Google modifed their Toyota Prius, they use position-estimating senosors, rotating sensors, video cameras, four automotive radar sensors, etc. They put all theses thing on a car to make it safe and to drive on its own. The driverless car can have all these features to be a very safe car to drive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18d9f24ebd95,C2DB3C695BCF,the driverless cars will help the environment and will spend less of our natrual resources. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+651ec24bc818,C2DB3C695BCF,"A Google cofounder Sergey Brin says, that the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of taday's taxis and offer far more flexiblity than a bus. These driverless cars provide less car accidents. With less accidents people won't get killed or injured.
+
+The driverless car will aslo provide less money of fuel. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ad75783a49d9,C2DB3C695BCF,the driverless cars will change our future. It will help people get around easily. The cars will provide greay safety features. Its will also help the environment. I hope i would be able to see these driverless car around someday. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ceeec6ebf016,C2E0FC6F097D,I do not think that students should be required to perform community service. I do think that it should be highly recommended though. ,Position,Effective,,,
+aaacb0c63a72,C2E0FC6F097D,I think it should be recommended and not forced because some students actually do not have the time to perform community service. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a640b0a3a7f4,C2E0FC6F097D,"Say your friend was on the school basketball team and he was part of the Spanish honor society, school would end at three he would have to go to a Spanish honor society meeting from three until four thirty then he would need a to do his homework for two hours then he would have a basketball game at six, then he would need to eat dinner when he got home and eight thirty and by then he would be too exhausted to even move let alone perform community service and he would have to repeat this every day until the weekend which he will need to sleep and do homework and also relax from a tough week ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8bc5a1655ab9,C2E0FC6F097D,"on the other hand there are the people who go home blow off their homework and either hang out with friends or play video games, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+747c54982bdd,C2E0FC6F097D,that is why I would highly recommend community service instead of forcing it. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fd2631af9c40,C2E0FC6F097D,it would be unfair if the people who are working constantly their whole week have to then perform community service after their long and hard week behind and a new one imminently coming. while it is completely fair for the slacking and un working people to take time out of their day to help their community ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+48a17f5dd55b,C2F4EDC43D71,"
+As a student's perspective I think that the school board shouldn't have any cell phones allowed at all. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3f3dcfaae054,C2F4EDC43D71,"The young generations all ready uses technology about 17 hours a day when they come to school, their intelligence and thoughts should be focused on school ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6b3b930fbde,C2F4EDC43D71,"there are some students that will follow the rules and only use their cell phones during lunch and other free times. However as a teenager perspective, students will try to use their cell phones during class it's been proven many times before. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+54da0ff76d68,C2F4EDC43D71,"Many of the smart phones of these modern times are fascinatingly convenient and impressive. One of the more popular phone called the iphone, has: a g. p. s. system, go on the internet, text call and I.M. all at the same time and has much as 16 gigga bites with way more features than that. Most phones can do that as well even more, some people depend on their or PDA because their plans, schedules connections with people all over the world is on their device. Although students come to school to gain an education, the can't focus and do that correctly with cell phone distracting them ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a28d73d3f196,C2F4EDC43D71,"If the students are detracted form what they need to do, that eventually leads to bad grades, not a good job and worse lack of education, and with these present days, it is mandatory to have a good education. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b72886023a23,C2F4EDC43D71,"Also, if the students lose their phone they have trouble to deal with ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4f3f7d172762,C2F4EDC43D71,"Now, I do realize that if a person does lose their hone they can tell the company buy a new and have all the information transferred to that new cellular phone. Yet, if you do that you are still burning through money in to something very wasteful ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5326505478c4,C2F4EDC43D71,"And sometimes you don't even lose, some students would actually have the nerve to steal other peoples cell phones which dies happen at a so increase ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+35eed177516b,C2F4EDC43D71,"Many students call and text their family and friends, not a lot are doing business calls and making plans for certain events ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e36b6b66acd2,C2F4EDC43D71,Some would say if there was ever an emergency at the school they should be able to have their phone and call their parent ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1cd954f2f1da,C2F4EDC43D71,But part of the faculties job is to protect from the outside danger. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0c4f4564b00a,C2F4EDC43D71,Finallty in my opinion I this having cell phone ith school is a horrible idea ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+73a792f83d4b,C3194A4504F5,Students would not benefit from taking online classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0a94f60c274e,C3194A4504F5,in school students are more likely to pay more attention. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86ae66e9599c,C3194A4504F5,"Students in school are more active because students walk to different classes they communicate to other students and teachers at home students are more likely to fall asleep or be sleepy when they are doing there work which makes it harder for the home school students to have full attention to there work. Attention wise students at home would seem to be less focus on the task at hand, access to there phones all day would make it even harder to get work done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8a52a5e1d36b,C3194A4504F5,"Public school students also have grades that they want to keep up to par, home school students don't ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+af4d2cba4589,C3194A4504F5,"Socialization is a big part to a teens life, home school students dont really have the social life students in school have ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6fe56882a5e4,C3194A4504F5,not having a social life can be hard and sometimes depressing. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1c6d2b1c2ae4,C3194A4504F5,"Some home school students parents dont keep them on track while at home whether its because they are living with a single parent or both there parents are working or having issues, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f1cd3e9162e7,C3194A4504F5,in school they have teachers and counselors to keep them on the right track sometimes school staff can act like a parent to the students keeping them comfort ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3d7c7c9952e1,C3194A4504F5,Home school students parents also might not have the money to really supply them with food ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6cebb384d55c,C3194A4504F5,but while in school they are served with a free lunch and breakfast every single day. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09db791d75fb,C3194A4504F5,"Home school students dont have the opportunity to be apart of a club or sport at school, they dont have a chance to experience or be apart of school spirit. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+41efb976022c,C3194A4504F5,Being to relaxed can contribute to lack of attention in people and at home is the place you are most comfortable at so learning at home would just be a waste of time in my opinion. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9ce36428514,C3194A4504F5,Home schoolers are doing everything over a computer or a device which can strain your eyes and can cause long lasting eye damage. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b07b73ff599,C3194A4504F5,At home theres only one workplace ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+56c8f439de6d,C3194A4504F5,"while in school we mix up the workplaces to library, computer lab, and classroom even outside ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fffd32b97a5,C3194A4504F5,People at home dont get a chance to get that extra help that teachers offer in school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42e8a9b0887e,C3194A4504F5,"they dont get to stay after school to meet up with there teachers and talk about school work, this is very helpful for students at public schools it gives them a chance to talk to teachers about any work they have or havent done there absences and any worked they missed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f4029437deb7,C3194A4504F5,Students that get home schooled dont get the most out of there teaching its more distractions and plenty other stuff that throw them off track. I dont think schools should offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3239aa6edf9c,C319BB7948FB,Introducing driverless cars to today's society would be a very big step in technology. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0c3e3494e902,C319BB7948FB,"Though it would be a big step, it would not be a step in the right direction. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+023a17246ce4,C319BB7948FB,"They have yet to create a car that can fully operate on its own. there are too many sensors needed in order to safely use a driverless car, such as video cameras mounted near the rearview mirror, automotive radar sensors, and a dubbed LIDAR ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58a483d5ce27,C319BB7948FB,"With all of the sensors needed, one could stop working while the car is in motion putting the passenger in danger. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+724722fd91c8,C319BB7948FB,Conflicts between the users of the driverless cars and the manufaturers would be in presence often. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42d792eb0316,C319BB7948FB,"The user of the car may often find problems that he or she cannot fix themselves and would have to spend a lot more money to take it in to get fixed. The users might also come to a stituation where the car is in condition to where it cannot get fixed and then have to buy a new car, causing thaty person to spend more money. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+40a27fbe6ad6,C319BB7948FB,Putting Driverless cars on the road will put people in more danger. Users and manufacturers will not have a trustworthy relationship and people would spend more money than they do on regular cars. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+783070fab0e3,C380E7F27492,"Well when we 1st hear about the Electoral College we think it's some college where students go who drive BMW's, Audi's, Nissian GTR's, Nissan Skylines,Honda Civic SI's,Toyota Supras,Chevy HHR SS,Ford Focus RS,Subaru STI's,etc. But is it really a college like that? No unfortunately not as a matter a fact it's not even a college to physical go to ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cd3c0fdbdb42,C380E7F27492,"According to paragraph 1 it says "" The Electoral College is a Process not a place the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" So when you hear that it's not a place and its a process yay! we're learning ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d956143b94f,C380E7F27492,"that's not the question so wait heres the part when you feel like the biggest chunk again... the question is Does The Electoral College Work? Aha see you thought you won the 4v4 but really it's just getting started. Like how can you win if you don't know anything about the process college well thank godness im here because im gonna educate you goats. According to paragraph 2 ""The Electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president,and the counting of the electoral votes by congress"". So what i think it's saying is that this is how like our wonderful presidents get elected. this is the voting system that elects vice pres,pres,meeting the to runners and electors thats the electoral college in a nut shell. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+abff88b0aafb,C380E7F27492,So let me tell you why our founding fathers started this in 1769's or something like that but ever since they made this system it's been going on until 2015! ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+990477453235,C380E7F27492,"so the answer to that question would be yes it does work because it gives the people a right to choose who they want and the president doesn't get to much power and without this system we wouldn't have any presidents you know what i mean. 
+",Position,Ineffective,,,
+ea4ac59424cf,C39C5D9C9ED8,"Now you may be in favor of the Electoral College but sir I'm here to change you mind. Why are so many people in favor of this process maybe because they can guzzle up your money , my money
+
+OUR
+
+money . I say lets go with popular vote not some elector in a monkey suit. We let them have a ""winner-take-all"" system as stated in paragraph 7 from an excerpt from "" What Is The Electoral College "". Why do we need make the District of Columbia like their own state , why should we go threw all the hassel of putting certain numbers of electors for each state when we can just go with popular vote. The vote we have. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+72ecd398299e,C39C5D9C9ED8,"Why do we need such an abomination for voting, when we can all vote for the person we want to win the election not, just some group of electors Democratic or Republican so they can vote for us ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e080fa0d1472,C39C5D9C9ED8,"We as the
+
+PEOPLE
+
+should have the right to vote for our selves. It's such a crazy process ,we could just as easly mess up who we voted for , it's not always very clear . ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+07c24f53af84,C39C5D9C9ED8,"WE
+
+dont even really vote for our Electors. ""Well who does ? "" you ask. The state conventions ,sometimes the state party , sometimes even the presidential candidates themselves. We should be lucky that the 2000 election was the biggest crisis in a century ; but this process could end up getting much worse like in 1960. The segregtions almost led to no more Democratic electors. We still proceed with all evidence as to why we shouldnt have Electoral Colleges. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18ce9098b31c,C39C5D9C9ED8,We do have democratic electors but the Electoral College is a very non-democratic process. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+523a76c7a347,C39C5D9C9ED8,"People in favor of this say even since 2000 when Gore had more popular votes than Bush but fewer electoral votes it hadn't since 1888 . We are the the people we should have a voice that rings loud and clear , not one who whispers under the big booming voice of the people the higher leaders think have a bigger say. We should be the majority not the minority. Even in favor of the Electoral college you can see the many flaws that have come about the age old process. You have the swing states that follow a ""winner-take-all"" method. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21afd19221de,C39C5D9C9ED8,Then we have the big states that use some of their large states. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9b5bf4f3774e,C39C5D9C9ED8,like in Florida the 2012 election the state had a very close popular vote and got 29 electoral voates. Then it came down to Wyoming with 3 electoral votes and it took all. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fb7e8c38522d,C39C5D9C9ED8,"Now I hope you can see why We should toss the Electoral College out the second story window. The vote's come to close to call in a lot of these runnings. The people we vote for can always turn their backs. Plus it just gets to caiotic to handle even when we treat the district of Columbia a state. Even the people with the popular vote get tossed out the window. The Electoral College should be put down , and Replaced with the Popular votes of the Us citizens.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fef474da7b96,C3A3146784DC,"What is wrong with having our phones out during school?
+
+I can understand having them out in class is wrong but what's wrong with having them on lunch or tutorials? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7b78921c51ce,C3A3146784DC,Sometimes I think grownups just do things to restrict us with no probable cause. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c7d3bfc4cbac,C3A3146784DC,Let us having our phones out during times like lunch will probable even help us with school it will make us eager to come to school because we'll be having more fun. Come on you cant really sit there and give me reasons why that's a rule it's supposed to be a free country. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+caf3d729f757,C3A3146784DC,"I know, understand, and believe why we wear seat belts, why drugs are illegal those things make sense but this doesn't ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6981577b397c,C3A3146784DC,so im saying with the entire school on my side lets try cell phones just for times like lunch or even a couple days out of the week. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+daac6d4e6174,C3A3146784DC,im definitely going with policy one ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6496649689ea,C3A3146784DC,policy two is a bad choice ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5dcab80735df,C3A3146784DC,what if there's an emergency and we need to call some one or someone in our family is hurt and my family is keeping me updating. so how can you possibly go with policy one ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24b821a972d1,C3A3146784DC,Just give us a chance ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+682e8ba6503a,C3B3A972189C,"Driverless cars are in our near futrue. Cars like these need to have protection for everybody. I like the idea of that they are trying to make them, trying to make them smater, and trying to make smater roads for us to drive them on too ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+68d1bdc784db,C3B3A972189C,"Just my opion on them is that its a good idea and I would love to experince riding one. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+8dba34d00452,C3B3A972189C,how would we have smater roads is my question? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a868f1ce4527,C3B3A972189C,I think that it would be expensive. Would there be only certin road we could us these types of cars on? The whole idea on have these types of cars amazes me but it would be kinda scary to try something like this out. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df059aacaf22,C3B3A972189C,I like the whole idea on that the car would have to have someone that is checking out for the car but it would be hard for the person to keep the concentration on the road. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+ea76cfe8d499,C3B3A972189C,the law doesnt allow us to try things out with these cars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+51d063df97bf,C3B3A972189C,I mean that would be a major issue for the people testing them ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afc4cf9e7f08,C3B3A972189C,I also was thinking how hard would these cars be to drive? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74ee086d9a4a,C3B3A972189C,Would we have to have some special training to drive one? I read in the passage that the car would automactily tell you when it would be time for you to start driving but what if the driver is hispanic or any other race and the car tell them its there turn to drive in english. Would there be settings for that or no ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+237fc6fb4224,C3B3A972189C,"Also what is the whole point on driverless cars I think they would be able to get around in traffic, accidents , and construction sites? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1815cc0c48a2,C3B3A972189C,"I think it would also be alot nicer if they could get around that stuff on there own too. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+33a92051c3d9,C3B3A972189C,"Anyway these cars would be nice to have around and all. I would also love to ride in one just to experiece the feeling and listen to the way that they would transfer to the person who is siting in the drivers seat. these cars would be the bomb if they really were driverless and are easy to control. I would love to see what it all comes down to, I really do look forward to it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8275389d43f0,C3C4D847175E,The Electoral College has many amazing things people like about using it .When it comes to voting not many people do ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+3d68f12fd9eb,C3C4D847175E,"Thats why in the Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. There are about 538 electors, now that's alot of people if you ask me. Only 270 of the electoral votes is required to elect the President which is an okay amount of votes for the President election. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7581de64110,C3C4D847175E,"On the other hand, under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who inturn elect the president. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themeselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century, but the system allows much worse. People are more worried about having a tie in the electoral vote. The election would be thrown in the House of Representatives, where state delegation vote on the President, also the senate would choose the Vice President. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+adb1a7175f16,C3C4D847175E,"Not everyone thinks the same tho about electoral College because some people dont like it because some states have more representatives,but yet again what if it was your state that have the most representatives like Califorina with 55 of them wouldnt you want a huge avantage like that? I know I would.  ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c4c84dc63799,C3D4F36886E5,"I dont think there will ever be a 100% driverless car i think there will alway be a person with some what controll or should be at all time even in a car that has all the most advanced driverless tecnlogty. i think the need for a humman is needed at all times becaus that tecnlogy wiil fail and if ther is one driverless car on a highway and the human is not in controll and if it was to mess up it could kill a lot of inacent people. but my personal opion is if there are a few driverless cars cool use them at spechel event like the daytona 500,award ceremoneys, in honering someone and things like that..... i think i would be a bad idea to make them avalible to the public for many reasons some being when they mess up how many people will get hurt and when theyn sell them only rich people will be able to afford them because the tecnlogy will be so advanced and cost so munch and the incerence will cost a fortune and when they fail and if they are able to fix them who and how munch will it cost to fix. if people are to lazy to drive them selves then we have a problem ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7952cf867ebc,C3D4F36886E5,yeah ot would be cool to have a couple driverless cars in the country but not to make multipule ,Position,Adequate,,,
+300e5635eddc,C3D4F36886E5,im not sure how may people would buy themi would not like not being in controll of what my car is doing . ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dd14b82b3180,C4008B4496ED,"In 1976, the Viking 1 set course to mars. When the Viking 1 was orbiting mars, the Mars Global Surveyor took a photo of a strange figure. It looked like a shadowy human face. The question everyone is asking is who are what made this? Was it aliens or is it just natural. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+112bb08d2866,C4008B4496ED,"If you ask me, this strange looking thing is just a natural landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e1ee47d71d85,C4008B4496ED,My first reason is that only a few of my friends from NASA believe that this strange landform was really made by aliens. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e031cde9eae9,C4008B4496ED,I also think that this is just a landform because the photo that we took was not very clear and that could have made the landform look like a face. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c68f36dd4d58,C4008B4496ED,"I also think that this is just a land form because the time of year that we took the one of the photos. When we took the photo in 1998, we took the photo during the winter on Mars and it made Mars sort of cloudy and the Mars Global Surveyer had to peer through the wispy clouds to see the strange landform ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+364e3a04a33b,C4008B4496ED,"Some of my friends from NASA were saying that some of the so called ""alien markings"" were hidden ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+11399b5e4ef1,C4008B4496ED,"My final reason for thinking that this is just a landform is that when we took the thre pictures and compared them, they all looked different from each other. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+87cb678fd63c,C4008B4496ED,The picture we took in 1976 looked like the face the most out of the three pictures. The picture we took in 1998 did not have the same details of the first picture and it did not look like a face. The picture we took in 2001 did not have the facial features of the first photo either. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+caf1670bd6f5,C4008B4496ED,"In conclusion, I think this is just a landform because only a few of my friends believed that it was done by aliens, the photo we took in 1998 was different due to some of the factors of weather, and all three photos looked different from one another.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eeba3b73f4e3,C41CDE2FD0F5,Do voters some times get confused about the electers and vote for the wrong candidate? The single best argument against the electoral is what we might call a disaster facter. We the people should consider ourselves lucky to vote ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+65838f015d22,C41CDE2FD0F5,"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votesthe winner. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b686367a8788,C41CDE2FD0F5,"If the advocates of this position is correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense . It is the electers who elect the president, not the people . It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. yet this has happened very rarely when Gore had more popular votes then Bush . It can be argued that the Electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a canadidate who has no hope of carrying their state . And not having everyone vote mite throw things off too. but of courseno voters  vote swings a national election, and in spite of that about one -half the eligible American population did vote in 2012 's election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4aaffb895c45,C41CDE2FD0F5,"It think we all think thatevery one should yote and know basic back ground on who there voting for, and avoid  run off elections. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+a16aab1eb4bf,C42978129AAC,I think you should use policy 1 for several reasons. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+30869da64477,C42978129AAC,"If someone needs a ride after school and there are no cell phones, there will be no way to communicate with your parents or get any help. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccf1f72ea266,C42978129AAC,Cell phones should be turned off in class though. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+055a09fda4b6,C42978129AAC,I see many people with their phones under their desks and that is not okay. That is a distraction from getting your learning that your teacher works hard on showing you ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e06012d0841,C42978129AAC,"Though cell phone use is inappropriate in class, it should be okay to use them during lunch. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+82cadb18b738,C42978129AAC,"Lunch is your free time, you should be able to do any thing you want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f5901b2cbf17,C42978129AAC,"Some adults get really worked up over cell phones. They aren't a bad thing. They are amazingly useful and they are only bad when they are used in class. Cell phones are great for communicating. You can talk to someone anywhere at anytime for free. If you need help or are in a car accident, you can just use your cell phone and they will help you. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3f9425a29814,C42978129AAC,"If you use policy 1 as your guide line, I expect you to not change any single word to the policy. You will expect us to not use them in class or anywhere at school other than at lunch or other free times. Thank you for reading this message and I hope you agree with me. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c1672b55068c,C42EBA5B3529,"The Electoral college can be greatly described as a pedigree. The Electoral College being around for so long as the time of our founding fathers- quite a long time, now having doubts? ""The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anaschornism,"". Can't say that anyone shouldn't be surprised just like anything in this life everything comes to an end at some point ",Lead,Effective,,,
+93c8f76088fd,C42EBA5B3529,"Agreed that it is unfair something like the Electoral College to be around especially in this era, it craves more rights than it feels it's been restricted from ",Position,Adequate,,,
+afaafa901db6,C42EBA5B3529,"Yes, it has a history that truly lights the room of American development, but already many things from the government have changed, Would it really hurt to change the Electoral College? 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ffb94a9146d,C42EBA5B3529,America has always been about the people? With the Electoral College it's the people's choice with a twist. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62f8131223a1,C42EBA5B3529,"""voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors,"" it would be much simpler if the candidate you voted for would just be elected, and also democratic to choose that way...totally giving your vote to a group of people. Although their hasn't been numerous situations in which the Electoral College vote will dosen't win the national popular vote...It still happened and also a possibility that it can happen again! Why have two different types of votes when you can easily have one vote? ""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population)"" the vote is America broken in one whole breaking up the population in each state, which is equivalent to breaking us up in 13 colonies. We should be considered one! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4d143d954e17,C42EBA5B3529,"""The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November."" Example that everything is in order and exact, and has not changed just like how over the years we have found that some things that our Founding Fathers did were ""wrong"" why not put doubt in the electoral vote? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c4c83e310ee,C42EBA5B3529,"Yes, also true the electoral vote keeps other parties who are not sufficient enough to run the country ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+32e546ed8c8d,C42EBA5B3529,"but their aren't many voters usually not voting for either a republican or democrat, proof that the electoral vote simply is an anachronism ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f2f23dc74dcd,C42EBA5B3529,"A winner-take-all basis dosen't seem like that big of a deal after all only one person has to be president, but the electoral vote dosen't affect that...at all. Any rebuddle going against a non-electoral voting society dosen't seem to make a valid reason. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa76ff512feb,C42EBA5B3529,"this letter is simply a right this country has given me as a citizen-freedom of speech. My defense is equality, and shouldn't be ignored sometimes a pedrigree like the electoral vote needs to change. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+750a9cf90b0b,C44019DF831B,"One big milestone in a person's teenage years is when they have to take a driver's test to get their license. Many people often become stressed behind the wheel during the driver's test because they are afraid of making mistakes. The people of our generation are just as nervous about these test as our older generations but what if that were to change in the future? What if, instead of driving cars where we have to be driving one hundred percent of the time, there were cars out there that allowed the car to do the driving for us? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bdd0cfad3494,C44019DF831B,"Many companies have been working on the idea of ""driverless cars"" in hopes that they will reshape the whole concept of driving. However, that does not mean they are a good thing. Driverless cars should not be used in the future ",Position,Effective,,,
+8f61fbb88957,C44019DF831B,"because they could take away the focus of the driver, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4517019ba82,C44019DF831B,"the future generation wouldn't know about driving basics, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9577bf55b99,C44019DF831B,"and they are illegal in some states. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+22d215f995a3,C44019DF831B,"As these driverless cars are being invented, they allow drivers to meerly sit back in the drivers seat and enjoy the road. Sitting for thirty minutes in a car will not be enough to satisfy the boredom of some people. There are people out there who can not deal with sitting in one place for a few minutes and have to do something to keep them busy. Therefore, their focus could easily move to something else other than the road, like a fellow passenger or at the scenery around them. Driverless cars are not entirely driverless. As said in the article, ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires."" What if the driver is not prepared to take over when the situation requires? These new cars may have features of notifying an individual when they need to take over but if they are not ready because they were focused on something else, then the results could be disastirous. This is why it takes away focus from drivers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cff308d450a7,C44019DF831B,"Many teenagers today have to take drivers ed classes as they attempt to obtain a license from the BMV. But what would future generation drivers have to go through for their driving exams if we have driverless cars. As stated before, driverless cars aren't entirely driverless. The newer generations still have to learn to basics of driving even if they will be driving in a driverless car in the future. If this does not happen, then they could be in trouble if their driverless cars malfunction or they are forced to drive a regular car instead. The future generations will probably not know about the driving basics because they will think they are too far advanced for it. For example, not many people know how to drive ""stick"" or even know what that means even though it was vital for driving long ago. If someone were to enter a car that needed that kind of function, they would not know what to do. And the same thing applies to future generations if they would not know the driving basics. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bbe4aa6bd1d4,C44019DF831B,"According to the article, ""Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control ata all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars."" With the government concerned about the safety of a driver behind the wheel, they will not allow driverless cars on the roads. The safety of the people is more important than to advancement of technology. Until the driverless cars have been updated to the time where they are safe for everyone, there is no way that driverless cars will be seen on the roads with regular cars for quite some time. This is why driverless vehicles are against the law in some states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f7ce95ba5ce7,C44019DF831B,"In conclusion, driverless cars should not be used in the future because they take away the driver's focus, the future generations need to learn about the driving basics that we use today, and it is illegal to use computer-driven cars. Of course, in the future, new technology will arise to give people more mobility and ways of transportation but that will not happen until everyone is safe. Many individuals are in car crashes every year from lack of focus on the road. Driverless cars can add to this problem just like any other and until we have to tools necessary to ensure they safety of the people using driverless cars, there is no way that they will be seen among the streets. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+88671ff0cb4e,C4804C3EEBD7,I think that we should keep the Electoral College but we could also change election by popular vote ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+8b74f76f9e2e,C4804C3EEBD7,"because there could be problems over the outcome of an Electoral College, the reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. A candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president. Voters in toss-up are more likely to pay close intention to the campaign, knowing that they are going to decide the election. The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the vote cast. It also restores some weight in the political balance. There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast. The Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+46017f311c6d,C4804C3EEBD7,"Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electoral. Most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. Your states Certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election. Voters can expect close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. Under the electoral college system, voters don't vote for the president, but for electors, who in turn elect the president. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. The person who picks the electors in the first place depends on the state ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+668d27e80f04,C4804C3EEBD7,"The argument against the electoral college is what we might call disaster factor. If there is a tie in the electoral vote, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Because each state casts only one vote. the electoral college is unfair to voters, because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, they only focus on the right races in the swing states. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote the party's nominee, but it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Elecotral college is widely regarded as an person or a thing that seems to belong to the past and not to fit in the present, it's a non- demogratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receive most popular votes the winner. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+269ea24c17a4,C4804C3EEBD7,So i think we should keep electoral college because it's a process not a place. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9649ef74ad75,C4804C3EEBD7,"""The founding faters established it in the constitution as compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf24f9000607,C48AEB2F1FC2,"The electoral college is a process established in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president & vice president, & the counting of electoral votes by congress. Their are five reasons for retaining the electoral college despite its lack of impressive democratic origin & history; all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+6d9a91004d50,C48AEB2F1FC2,"Our country would be much better off if we kept the electoral college, rather than choosing the president just based on the popular vote. ",Position,Effective,,,
+29be42c9dff3,C48AEB2F1FC2,"The electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non democratic method of choosing a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+f27c4938fa2a,C48AEB2F1FC2,"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the electoral college methodis not democratic in a modern sense, it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate, youre actually voting for a slate of electors.
+
+The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Your states entitled alottment of electors equals the number of its congressional delegation: one for each member in the house of representatives plus 2 for each senator. Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidates political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected & what their responsibilities are. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68cf99e83ab5,C48AEB2F1FC2,The electoral college is good because it resores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ce90c418dfb,C48AEB2F1FC2,"The elctoral college also avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates to focus their campaign efforts on the toss up states. Votes in the toss up states are more likely to pay attention to the campaign- to really listen to the competing candidates- knowing that they are going to decide the election. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f81491c7b063,C48AEB2F1FC2,"however, it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national populr vote. Yet that has happened in 2000, when gorge had more popular votes than bush yet fewer electoral votes ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3a84447bf912,C48AEB2F1FC2,but that was the first time since 1888. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3fdc1c1f5f5a,C48AEB2F1FC2,It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no intention or hope of carrying their state ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+eb08025b159f,C48AEB2F1FC2,"democrats in texas, for example, or republicans in california. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign thn they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. But of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and in spite of that, about 1/2 the eligible american population did vote in 2012's election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think a single vote may decide an entire election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e57121f91d4,C48F269A6ED8,"Everyone has different way of learning .some people are visual learners,some are kinesthetic learner,which one are you? ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+25679a3f6a2b,C48F269A6ED8,Someone would argued that students will not do their homework online becuase it is more difficult and hard to undestartand. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5f67392cb58b,C48F269A6ED8,"Also,tudents will miss good leason from a teacher. Thus, an student will not share ideas with other, and they not going to joing a class more than a school. For, students need help all the time from a teacher. But at home they not going to have help by a proffecional becuase of that they will have low grades in their classes. In addion, attend classes at home makes children boring to only he or she attend classes in their home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b9c084149368,C48F269A6ED8,"This remiend me of when my friend used to have class online in his home. He always get stuck in something,and he didn't know how to figure out. when he ask his mom for help,she replay this is happens per not be in the school. My friend is a smart boy who like study a lot. but he told me that attend classes at home is a bad idea becuase teacher in the school could help him whanever he needs help. in this case at home noneone can give a hand to him. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0998050cd75,C48F269A6ED8,Someone would argued that students should attend classes at home. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e0326ae83745,C48F269A6ED8,"Students preffer to do their work at home because they can finish it more faster that in the school. therefore in the school there is a lot students who just go to the school for play and joke,whitch cause other to not do their work. it make other students get distration by other. futher in the school there is always conflict how other students dress,and some make bulling to other. So, take classes online at home is more benefit to all students who want to graduate from the school. As soon as posible. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a494442ed6c,C48F269A6ED8,"For example, doing our work online at home. It is more beneficial becuase students don't have a limite time to stop. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+31715426aa48,C48F269A6ED8,"In the school you have a limite time,but at home you don't have a limite time. Also, nobody is going to bother you when you are working at home. Moreover, students just focus on what they needs to do becuase it less distraction and oneone else around. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb60b2ffedff,C48F269A6ED8,"thus, it is beneficial take classes online becuase you don't have to pay money to the school for uniforms and, all the required things that they ask you to buy. When you can save the money,it can be use to pay the classes online. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3c2878888c1c,C48F269A6ED8,I think all students need to attend school to have better opportunities and better skills on learning. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f7ae82fc9a0e,C492123F426E,"Driverless cars, although dangerous in a multitude of ways, have uses that far excede any dangers. It is said that in order to progress in life you must first take steps back. Although these driverless cars are a step forward in technology, they can be seen as a being a step backward because of the dangers that persist. In reality, these dangers are just a learning curve to arguably one of the most revolutionary inventions in the last decade, driverless cars. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+56a47a289026,C492123F426E,These cars are very fesable ,Position,Adequate,,,
+2bb4f9f5f42e,C492123F426E,"they are sought after, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0cad76f8d199,C492123F426E,"the technology is available, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+443e518cf021,C492123F426E,they are getting safer with time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c7323f8cc486,C492123F426E,"The human has drempt of the flying car for generations, and finaly the idea is fesable. The text referances Google cofounder Sergey Brin, and how he ""envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system,"" (Paragraph 1). Although this is just the dream of one man, millions more people believe that driverless cars are the key to the future. These millions of other people have drempt for driverless cars, and many times their fathers did also. Knowing this, many people will want to get their hands on this new technology that is a driverless car. Making the development of these cars very positive becasue the population will want and has wanted driverless cars for decades. Driverless cars have been a thing of fiction for so many people for so long, but now these cars are a reality. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1c1442e70486,C492123F426E,"Driverless cars were always thought to be a thing of the past, but the reality is that they are a thing of the present and have been for many years. The writing points out that, "" Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009."" (Paragraph 2). While many people view driverless cars as a thing of the future, Google has formed them to be a thing of the now. This technology, that has been sought after for generations, is now readaly available. It was even said that Tesla has released plans to come out with a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time in 2016. (Paragraph 10). Knowing that these cars are being released this year is over the top of many peoples head, and shows that the development of these cars is indeed helpful. Knowing that the technology is already out in the world shows that the development of these cars grow every single day. This growth will positivly effect the automotive industry, and keep the people making these cars coming out with new and safe versions of these driverless cars. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cad714a062eb,C492123F426E,"This safety is both for the environment, and most importantly for the drivers of these cars. Indeed, these cars are as safe as they ever will be. We are reminded of the safety of these cars when paragraph eight reminds us that, ""In this way, the in-car system is actually a saftey feature, and saftey is a big concern,"" Not only is the in-car heads-up display a safty feature as it talks about, but reminds us that saftey is the biggest concern that the companies have. This paragraph even mentions how some of the ""fun"" features are for the saftey of the driver, mainly to keep them awake and alert at the wheel even if they are not the drivers. Knowing that saftey is one of the bigest concerns that the companies have for these cars sould be settling because consumers know that the automated cars that they buy would be in top conditions and have a multitude of features that keep both themselves and the passangers safe. One of the many features mentioned was the voice or even a vibrating chair to signal when the car needs a human to control the driving because the road needs the expertise of a human driver. Because these cars are safe, their development is very positive. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1628d8ef863e,C492123F426E,"The development of these driverless cars should be continued because they are sought after by many people, the technology is available and is being worked on, and these cars are safe and getting safer. By developing these tests, the companies are creating a technology that, to millions of people, is still only a dream. The complications that these cars may have is a minute detail in the ever evolving spectrum that is the saftey of these cars for the people inside an out. Driverless cars are no longer a thing of the future but make up our present in every way imaginable. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3d8056d17634,C4B52CBE6186,"The Face is an actual landform, it was not created by aliens. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4572bd648055,C4B52CBE6186,"In order for me to prove this to you I need facts, so that it is what the majority of this essay is going to be about. I will also be be telling you how I know that the Face on Mars is a landform. There are many facts as to why the Face on Mars is a landform and I will be sharing all of those that I can find with you.
+
+I will also be telling some other landforms that are similar to the Face. I am citing all of my evidence and facts from the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1ff16372072a,C4B52CBE6186,"One of my first claims that the Face on Mars is actually a landform and was not created by aliens is from paragraph three in ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" and it states, ""The caption noted a ""huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+77d0bd7da878,C4B52CBE6186,"At the beginning of that sentence it says ""a huge ROCK formation"" which is telling us that it is actually rock and that it had devolped over time to form into the shape of a face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6d919fb30348,C4B52CBE6186,"And that it was not created by aliens because aliens can not create or make rocks. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c728f4f41e88,C4B52CBE6186,"Another claim that the face is actually a land form and was not created by aliens is that in paragraph twelve is it giving us a very clear and precise meaning that the Face is an landform by telling us that, "" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. ""It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,"" says Garvin. ""That a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c32cc78842f0,C4B52CBE6186,That is telling us that there are more places in the world that are like the Face on Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+49f1e5ebd0aa,C4B52CBE6186,"That also means that if there are more places, then aliens could not have made the Face on Mars because that means it would have had to make all of the other mesas and buttes in the entire universe. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dc7e13f3f161,C4B52CBE6186,"Lastly, my final claim that the face is actually a landform and was not created by aliens is in paragraph seven in the article ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" and that it tells us that, ""And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c95c8f4f0bfa,C4B52CBE6186,"Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture tem times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3a0c9bd565e,C4B52CBE6186,"In conclusion I know that the Face on Mars is actually a landform and was not created by aliens because of the facts the a have cited from the article, ""Unmasking the Face on Mars"". I have given you very good claims as to why and I really hope that you change your opinion on this topic of matter. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0ab9c0d8fdf2,C4CE39433C61,I think cars should still be famous in the future so we could make new cars. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+f4c007903bd0,C4CE39433C61,cars floating in the air or cars that can drive on there own and drive us anywhere we want to go or cars that we could call in so we wouldn't to use our sell phones all the time. Or cars like the BMW could be upgraded for the future. And cars that have special sensers so the human driver can remain alert. And cars that can drive on its own and warn us if were going to have accidents. And google cars that can have fast WiFi and tv's so people wont get boared. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7d6a122f834b,C4CE39433C61,Then one day they could come out with cars that can always givbe you a heads up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81c556cef08e,C4CE39433C61,"always tell you about the weather and hoiw nice it is outside. Then if one of the drivers ask about the nearest place they could go out to eat or a park they could go to to have reunion of just to chill. then they could have cars that could drive you to defferent states like Navada, California. Florida, or District of columbia. And when something is wrong with the car it could worn the driver that its low on gas or something. Next the car could have Anti lock breaks when ever the owner gets in the car or if the car is going to be stolen the car could shut down or warn the sranger to get out of the car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3195f552bbb1,C4CE39433C61,"Next the car could have any station on it like country,rap, Hip Hop, or just any kind of music people like. Next they envent a new BMW that could speed up to 100 mph and then when you wake up in the morning the car could already have your coffee for you in the morning just in case you might forget. Then they could come out with a nother car called the Hyper BMW wich is the greatest car that has ever been anvinted. And in 2020 they would have cars that woulod have been huvering around and taking us every where. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6cbd0cd2a0f,C4CE39433C61,Finelly when they make the car they could test out the cars by using laser beams to test drive the cars that drive on there own and then when the car is ready it could be solled. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb671aab7584,C513DCACFD01,Electoral votes is what we need but some disagree ,Position,Adequate,,,
+64ef95088e6d,C513DCACFD01,Choosing our president is more complicated than people think it is . One thing that voters do not know when electing presidents is that their vote might not matter as much as they think due to the electoral college . Who is to say electoral votes or better than popular votes ? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef7e4857f2d6,C513DCACFD01,"To cemmence with , electoral votes usually doesn't change anything , if a candidate has the most popular votes it is more likely that electoral votes won't change anything ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aef66b5e298a,C513DCACFD01,"Although electoral votes did change the race during the 2000 election . Gore had more popular votes against Bush , yet Bush had more electoral votes ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dd2c5c83b1e9,C513DCACFD01,"That situation had not happened since the election of 1888 . In the past 200 years , only twice has electoral votes changed the peoples mind ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+62cf30af424a,C513DCACFD01,"Some still disagree because this means that the people aren't voting for a president , thy are voting for a slate of electors . ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+23fada85d7b8,C513DCACFD01,electoral votes are basically a summary of the states vote . People vote for a slate of electors to represent their state in the election . Voters will vote for a representative to choose who becomes president on electoral votes ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a77f05228dec,C513DCACFD01,Sometimes voters get confused and choose the wrong candidate which is one of the reasons why people think the electoral college should be terminated . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9020c085463,C513DCACFD01,"In conclusion , their have always been arguements about the electoral college , even past presidents were against it . Some say it's a good idea because it rarely affects the outcome but some argue that it doesn't let the people choose who they think should be president which violates one of the rights that citizens were granted .    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cb7c56054873,C5162A975732,"Is distance learning through video and online conferencing a great and beneficial way for students to learn from home or does it hinder one's chances of actually learning and having a good learning experience? Video conferencing is widely used in today's society as technology has boosted and upgraded. People often use video conferencing as a means to chat, have meetings and most importantly, educational purposes such as having class online. Many may claim that video conferencing through distance learning is a good thing because it gives students adequate time to spend time with family and have time for their jobs as well while taking classes online ",Lead,Effective,,,
+84a0cf280644,C5162A975732,Video Conferencing is not very advisable and great ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1d6d4c948e51,C5162A975732,"because having a face to face teaching can really help students understand better, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d3d5d6bfd49,C5162A975732,learning at home can bring unwanted distractions that keep students from staying focused ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cdc9b3a9d216,C5162A975732,"and distance learning also promotes laziness and affects health. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa721e8a8305,C5162A975732,"Firstly, video conferencing with distance learning from home is not advisable and great because students may prefer that they have a face to face talk with a teacher. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+017df8e2ea3c,C5162A975732,"In cases where a student may not understand something, having to physically be there in a school building and ask a question, the teacher can demonstrate carefully and step by step till the student is able to get a grasp of what is being taught and questions are clarified. Some students just prefer having the need to be around to understand, it makes it better for them. Whereas, when students are far away and learning through a video conference or online, it may be harder to understand because demonstrations may be a little unclear through a video. when there is a need for a question, doing classes online there's no one to ask at times so students have to go the extra mile of looking into researches, YouTube videos, etc before they're able to understand. something which waste time from their studies and brings conflict. Video conferencing is not advisable and taking classes may be better face to face which brings peace and makes things better. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eef453575647,C5162A975732,"Secondly, video conferencing with distance learning from home is not advisable and great because it brings distractions ",Claim,Effective,,,
+42b529c23c22,C5162A975732,"Taking classes online and learning from home brings unwanted distractions such as having the need to sleep, watching TV, playing games and having to take care of kids while doing class at the same time. With these distractions, students are not able to get their classes and work done, they're not able to stay focused on their task which can result in bad grades and affect one's education. This can eventually lead to depression and failure which is very sad and dangerous and needs to be taken seriously. A student may even struggle to get their grades up having to constantly deal with these distractions while juggling classes online. Video conferencing is not great and students should go to a school building and study to best eliminate any possible distractions to learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+57421cbbb845,C5162A975732,"Thirdly, video conferencing with distance learning is not advisable and great because it promotes laziness and affects health. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7696cc746e49,C5162A975732,"some students that often take online courses may get bored because they're constantly staring at a screen, so taking online classes starts to get boring for them and they start to get lazy and refrain from doing their work, students do that because they're constantly staring at a screen which starts to give eye problems. sitting behind a screen for prolonged hours causes problems for the eyes such as watery eyes and pain in the eye, sometimes eye twitches which make learning frustrating. So as a result, students stop doing their work. Whereas in a school building, students are not always looking at screens but white boards also which is less harmful to the eyes. Students are not lazy because classes ring from bell to bell, so students are always up and moving rather that sitting behind a computer all day. It's best to go to school without being lazy and staying healthy rather than using a video conference to learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3b32ee2f83d8,C5162A975732,"In conclusion, video conferencing and taking online classes with distance learning is not the best thing for students, because of the conflict and problems that come with it. It can greatly affect a student's education. With online classes, students may be faced with distractions which can cause them to stay off task and bring down their grades leading to frustration and depression. This can lead to suicidal thoughts and drain a student's life. Health is very important, and it is necessary that our bodies should be healthy. Taking online courses can have a negative and tragic effect on a student's body leading to eye problems, the eye being a very important body part. This may eventually let the student become unproductive and lazy. Also many students prefer having a face to face teaching session to make learning more efficient and better to understand overall. Students across the world should be able to learn the importance of physically being in school where there's plenty of teachers and resources around. Being in school is very important and can greatly benefit students. Technological advancements in the modern world is also very important and have been beneficial in helping with education and making education better. But students should not let the technology of today make them lazy and they should be willing to work hard and diligently.                      ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+0f2930b30e9d,C536086A1C31,The face on mars have to be a alien ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+5b0c48467dea,C536086A1C31,back in time they did not have spaceships ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5e971df7abd1,C536086A1C31,If they did have spaceships back in the past we would of already discover it by now. It's probably a alien because it was buried in the ground for so may years that face is actually popping out. They should unburied it to see if it's human or not. If it is they have alot of research to do if not they still have alot have research to do. They should try to see if a body goes with that head. It could be a decovery of a new world ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+524b23a926ad,C536086A1C31,"At the end of the article they said "" that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ec94d2a9313,C536086A1C31,They can also look up any information about mars having a volcanoe. That no one knows about. but if we just know found this it is more likey to be a alien. Because we been going to mars for a long time and it's weird that they just know recover that face. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eac24dd6ab3d,C536086A1C31,What happen if it's not a alien or human what if its just a rock that turned into a face.         ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0e6e8e5047ad,C5382404A84B,I think that u must have at least a B average to play a sport or activity is a bad rule ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f6cbedd82df2,C5382404A84B,if someone is in a more challenging class then it is harder for them to get a higher grad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+092640c394ea,C5382404A84B,maybe people need exercise and cant get it at home because they cant. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a560dee4f698,C5382404A84B,Or they cant do any sport or activity because they cant afford it these are some tough times ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe7a1f1aa8c3,C5382404A84B,Say if someone is in a level 1 class and are struggling in that class because level 1 classes are more difficult than level 2 classes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e49719e4e063,C5382404A84B,What if this person really wanted to try out but could not play because there grade is a C plus and need a B average to play on the sport team that they wanted to play on. And what if another kid had straight A' s but could not play on a team because they had one C then they couldn't play on that team. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b92ce1d07e6c,C5382404A84B,TEACHER_NAME what if there was a walking club at school and someone wanted to join the club because they needed to exercise ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e4d18edd070,C5382404A84B,And that person really didn't want to get mad fun of anymore because they would get made fun of because they were big and lazy and they only had one bad grade and they couldn't do that just because they have one bad grade. So for my second reason that you have to have at least a B average. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+269b5f7811ee,C5382404A84B,say someone wasn't the richest person in town and could afford for their child to play on a recreational team so they wanted to play on a school team. But had one or two horrible grades and couldn't play who knows he could be really good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ca8bf50909a,C5382404A84B,Again i think that it is a terrible rule for a child to play on a team or activity and must maintain a B average. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b896c63480f1,C55E6125411D,"If you are sane at all, you would not allow cell phones. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e2fd3cf98860,C55E6125411D,"Distraction, kids could run into each other in the hall ways using them. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6b60e5036ad,C55E6125411D,"Then, they will take up all their time using them in the free periods. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+965345f945f3,C55E6125411D,"A mess of supplies on the floors every where. Do you want that responsibility of being the janitor at the end of the day? Think of the law suites for even thinking about allowing this in school. I shudder at that thought. People will regret it to a point were they won't even think about bringing cell phones to school. Don't do it, or your going to be digging your own grave. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bd63fcc9ed09,C55E6125411D,Think of all the homework assignments left undone because student are to busy talking to even care ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d01cd4ed3211,C55E6125411D,"All of the failed tests because no one studied, not giving a hoot. The school shutting down, kids being moved to a different school. And who's fault was it? Yours. I like school, I know it is rare, but please... no cell phones! I want to see my teachers again. Day after day, have some pity on one child. Think of tomorrows future, don't you want to be apart of shaping it? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c966a1c87d6,C55E6125411D,"In a small conclusion, no cell phones in the school. Kids will make a mess with all that bumping into each other. Finally, the education going on with drop like a bomb. So, please don't make your own hectic sound-track from all the noise. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+456a37beecd3,C579A4D6151E,"Video-games, electronics, high functioning computers, wireless technology and so much more has become very popular in modern day society. Even schools have started to take a more technological approach to teaching. Many schools are offering new methods of teaching that include online courses such as video conferences ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a0b4e6c08025,C579A4D6151E,Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d04ad903171f,C579A4D6151E,there is a lack of guidance ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a91c8206e90f,C579A4D6151E,personal connections with teachers ,Claim,Effective,,,
+80b3acb1d9d3,C579A4D6151E,social skills. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+aed376c50a16,C579A4D6151E,Attending school from home would not be beneficial because there would be a lack of guidance ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4bc1f55d0821,C579A4D6151E,"A well known student at Generic_School, with above average grades, had chosen to take Physical Education online. Due to the unfamiliar feeling of the absence of a teacher in her presence, she received a D in the course. This shows that without having a teacher in one's physical presence, it is very easy to get lost. Compared to attending a real high school, online classes have less resources in times of confusion. Real high schools have thousands of students and near a hundred teachers who may help preventing one from getting lost, while virtual classes have maybe fifteen reliable sources. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af422dcef42f,C579A4D6151E,"Another exaple of this is a student who had moved to Virginia all the way from India that had trouble transferring their Algebra 2 credits and was forced to retake the class online in order to graduate, although previously receiving an A in the class in India. He had phenomenal work habits, but the technology confused him and although he understood the content, failed the course because of lack of guidance with technology. This is proof that not having anyone to help in means of technology or clarity, prevents one from full potential. Guidance is very essential to one's success, whether it be for clarity or not understanding how to operate advanced technology. Online courses open more problems than they solve because of simple misunderstandings that could be solved with personal guidance. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9c54003f23d0,C579A4D6151E,Another explanation of why attending school from home would not be beneficial is because there is no personal connections with teachers ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0d52a727338f,C579A4D6151E,"In the book, ""The Great Gatsby,"" Nick was able to find a new found trust for John upon receiving the information that they attended the same war together. This shows how John shifted from some mysterious guy to a possible trusted friend, all because of a personal connection. Schools offer this same opportunity with students and teachers, but online classes eliminate this opportunity. The online connection of a student and teacher is significantly reduced due to never seeing them or having any personal interactions ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9fe958e76631,C579A4D6151E,"A popular story at Generic_School, is one of a student who had a below average GPA, but had a fantastic relationship with his Business teacher. He was accepted into a prestigious Ivy league school and after calling them, he found out he was accepted based off of his teacher recommendation. This story shows how having personal relationships with teachers is very beneficial. An online course teacher does not have this same bond as an in-school teacher, and this represents one of the many possible cons. Overall, relationships with teachers has a very crucial and important role in a students life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e9849e690b6,C579A4D6151E,The final reason that attending school from home is not beneficial is that their would be a loss of social skills that a student learns while being in school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a33c626aa242,C579A4D6151E,"One example of this is ""Impractical Jokers,"" which is a show of four life-long friends who met in high school, and compete to do extreme and comical activities in public. This show shows us that these four friends developed social skills in high school and became closer due through school. If any of those guys took online classes instead, the chances of them being friends still in their forties would not be as high. Attending school in person is very important because it forces people to be social and make friends and not hide behind a computer, which a virtual class would allow. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+170956a6c5e4,C579A4D6151E,"Another example of this is Clemson's star quarterback, Trevor Lawrence. Him and his girlfriend have been together for years since high school, and he is now one year from entering the NFL. If he had chosen to attend classes from home instead, he would most likely not be with, or even know his current girlfriend. This shows that attending a real school is very beneficial, especially in the social aspect. Creating social skills and developing character is very important to do at a young age, and is difficult to do so while attending a class behind a computer monitor. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5084d06373aa,C579A4D6151E,"Overall, attending classes from home does not benefit students in the long run because there is an absence of guidance, personal connections with teachers, and social skills. All of these ideas are critical in a teenagers life and taking online classes prevents this. Schools should steer away from this new way of teaching and should attempt to maintain the current standards of teaching. The education of a student is very important, and the school system should do everything in its capability to improve it.           ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a80178e85fb5,C5A56B482FAA,"There is no need to change the school's policy so that students with a B average or above may be the only ones aloud to participate in sports and other school activities. Granted, students must keep up with their school work, but level of book smarts does not effect the qualities for sports or other activities. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0cc6247a163e,C5A56B482FAA,"Sports are based on levels of fitness, not brain activity. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+948cc22a3451,C5A56B482FAA,"If a student excels in a sport, he or she should not be limited to access of achieving their goals in this sport because they are not at a high academic level. Limiting their ability to participate in what they excel in can take away many opportunities. For example, one of your students has the skill to play on a professional sports team, but unfortunately they are not allowed to participate in sports at school because they have a C average. A C average today in math class doesn't determine their future as a MVP. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0e90f620844f,C5A56B482FAA,Taking a student out of sports and other activities will not promise higher grades. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bd8b67b2a140,C5A56B482FAA,Some students have learning disabilities that prevent them from learning to the standard that reaches a B average or above. Sports and other activities can stimulate the mind and actually help with learning. By allowing the students to participate in both sports and class they have a more likely chance to improve in both. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+b58d93f2a831,C5A56B482FAA,Many students have a C average in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4ea4e4e4b60,C5A56B482FAA,There is no statement that this is because sports or other activities are preventing a higher grade. It is possible that the students do not understand the topics as well because they are not being taught how they need to be taught. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef566dd635d5,C5A56B482FAA,"I understand that one believes that by not allowing students to participate in sports or other activities will limit their focus to school work, therefore allowing more time towards education ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6b761fe01c79,C5A56B482FAA,"Still, to live a healthy and well-rounded life, one must have the options to participate in activities other than school work. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a7b9d71bedd8,C5A56B482FAA,"Although you are considering the policy to chance, keeping the policy to allow any student participate in sports and other activities will permit them with chances of a better, well-rounded future. Think of the students futures above what they learn today and may not excel in. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4278a9ff42e2,C5B52323339E,i don't think that the faces were created by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+67dd9e78478e,C5B52323339E,aliens are made up creatures they are just tools to make science non fictional movies come to life ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cd976c033f2d,C5B52323339E,"I just strongly think that aliens are made up they can't be real there is no proof to back up what everyone believes . Space doesn't have any gravity so their can't be any animals up there floating ! The mask kinda looks like clay maybe the mask is made out of clay that you can mold it into anything you want ! I know that sounds crazy but someone thinking that a alien created makes it sound even more crazier ! Lets be VERY serious The article says ""Face on Mars has been popular in magazines and talk shows"" People will believe anything these days even i know that half of the things that the media says or does is not true and i also know that they make things up for attention or too be well known ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+032e455b637a,C5B52323339E,I don't have any evidence or proof that Aliens are real ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+abcda4f49553,C5B52323339E,"There is NO proof so i can't process it i know somebody named De'Oshmonya that knows a lot about mars and space so i may have to ask her what she thinks about it im sure she will tell me everything i need to know ! It may cause a little argument tho , but thats okay we're still going to be close . This passage helped me because it taught me some things i didn't know and it prepares me for the future it does make me wonder Are aliens real ? When i go to sleep tonight i may do some research and i'll try to find some proof . I should've done research so i could have a lot of evidence to back my statement up that would've been the best thing to do . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8906df5ffbb,C5B52323339E,Even tho i said i don't believe in aliens it does make me question alot of things . This article was written way before i was born things have changed and everything should be different now. Maybe if aliens were real they were probably alive in the ancient times and probably left when the dino's left ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b833fbc3fd46,C619833B1D5D,"Whether you are someone who believes conspiracy theories, or are just plain stupid and think that somehow the Face is evidence of alien life, you are still wrong ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b222b379e6cb,C619833B1D5D,"It's just a rock, a plain, thousands of years old, heap of rock. The End, no ""Ifs, ands, or buts"", there is evidence saying that this is just a mesa, a landform, we have picture proof of it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+27cdf3bac6dd,C619833B1D5D,"So, I will cover two major points to prove to you that it's a landform, common sense, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a0f20ce7101,C619833B1D5D,and the facts that we here at NASA have proven to be true. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f551e1c1c4b,C619833B1D5D,"First off, this argument is over whether Face was created by aliens, or whether it is just a natural landform. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+aba91d14fdeb,C619833B1D5D,"This is a pretty strange argumental topic, as people who believe this stuff anyway will hardly be convinced by a random scientist at NASA. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+47961e65d2ee,C619833B1D5D,"Anyway, there is proof we have that face is just a natural landform, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ed67155c5719,C619833B1D5D,"we have taken multiple pictues of it, and have concluded that, as shown with this cite of evidence, ""What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the America West."" We can even say that it was not obscured by any clouds or haze because it was clear day on Mars the day the picture was taken. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f592011d5db0,C619833B1D5D,"That should be the end of the discussion, but yet you say, ""But Mister science man, what if the pictures that you took couldn't see it because it was too small?"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dbbfce31938c,C619833B1D5D,"Well, that point can actually be rebuted as well, because of what Jim Garvin, the chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, said, ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixer size,"" he added. ""So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"". Factually that should be the end of it, it was a clear picture, that was enhanced for farther detail, on a clear day, with a high resolution camera. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+bf6bd6f5976f,C619833B1D5D,"Don't think I don't see you thinking, ""But will a only a photo actually be able to properly discern whether this is natural."" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+751dda0cba4b,C619833B1D5D,"Well......no, it won't. Actually, you have me entirely beat on the fact that it simply could be a landform, made by aliens. Yes, there I admit it, sit at home and laugh at the fact that I could be wrong. Look, Mister Whoever reads this for a job, I argue for a living with my friend, and there is simply not enough evidence to actually say that there is no way that this is not alien made. There is actually a chance, somewhere, somehow, a superficially small chance that aliens might have had someplay in this. I know that all sounds crazy, but seriously, think about it. All we have is some lously picture that, while it shows us the exteriror, it doesn't show us anything about the interior of the landform. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3102b13ace56,C619833B1D5D,"Here is the other side to the point I just made, think about this rationally for a second, could aliens really have made a monument or some strange thing on Mars, only for it to be found by humans? ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+64c6e05472d6,C619833B1D5D,"Probably not, and all of this is so improbable that I really don't even need to write an argumentative essay about it anyway. There is an extremely small and slim chance that aliens had any part in making a mesa on Mars. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b89fff37386,C619833B1D5D,"So all in all, there is factual proof we have, cited from the text I was given to say that aliens had no part in the making of Face, and that it is a natural landform. However, it isn't concrete proof, so for all we now it could be an alien itself. I have no idea, and neither will you. Again though, rationally, it has no relation to aliens. So that's all I got, the end.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3bc9070b1b1a,C62E3292FB47,I think we should ge rid of it because if people vote for a preident and then they dont get what they want there gonna get mad and revolt aginsit the government ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9e0ea8343d90,C62E3292FB47,In the electoral government voters dont vote for the president but for state of electors and i thinks thats wrong and then they turn and elect the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a4721a60ea7,C62E3292FB47,It is called a disaster factor in 2000 there was al gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60%of the voters would prefer a direct election. They dont want the one we now have. If you vote for a president youd vote for a slate of  democratic electors pledged to the president you want to vote for. The elcotors can be anyone not holding public office. And it depends on the state you live in on who is a elector sometimes people get confused and vote for the wrong cantidate. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7858c20c5a92,C62E3292FB47,The electoral collage is not a democratic methode of selecting on who WE WANT AS PRESIDENT ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8669a4bd183,C62E3292FB47,we dont get a say on we dicide on who we think is best sutible for running the united states. and we have to get other peple diciding on who runs the country ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b5b2d2d2a4e,C62E3292FB47,hers why i think we shouldent. Its not fair for small states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5275f254048f,C62E3292FB47,becuse they have less of a voice then big states and the dont get much of a say in we they want as a president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae36c173ea32,C62E3292FB47,Some good reasons on why to keep it is becuse it can avoid run off election the electoral collage requirws candidate to have trans regional appeal. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0ef5275e1caa,C62E3292FB47,A dispute over the popular vote compared to only 51.3 precentas steated in source 3 number 2 ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c059e2918a6c,C62E3292FB47,The electoral collage is overall unfair to voters becuse of the winner takes all system in each state ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+8fd1a9b75cf3,C62E3292FB47,candidates dont spend there time on states they cant win. so they go stright for the swing states and that not sair to the smaller states. And thats why smaller states feel left out cuse all the candidates want to go to the big states and try to win them over insted of allthe smaller states ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+93221c7a1403,C62E3292FB47,Over all the electoral college is unfair outdated and irrational and that why i think we should get rid of the electoral college its not fair to any voter that wants to vote and think taht there vote isent gonna matter so they dont vote. This is why i think we should get rid of the electoral college and why is is unjust and its not what we want.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b17a68b836c5,C65C1B3AA577,"It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college!"" ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+62e1442bd815,C65C1B3AA577,I strongly suggest you on changing to election by popular vote and getting rid of the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+61298f3ccf72,C65C1B3AA577,As you can see on the quote above people really don't like the Electoral College. This would be a very wise decision ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+12f5dfc47a6a,C65C1B3AA577,the Electoral College is very old and unfair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a90e12bb406c,C65C1B3AA577,it cause many crisis to happened. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b213a5271bea,C65C1B3AA577,First and foremost the Electoral College is very old. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cdac8ce766e0,C65C1B3AA577,"
+It states in the article ""Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why the best-laid of defense of the system are wrong"" ""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.""
+
+This quote explains how the electoral college is getting old and unfair so we should start fresh with a new change from electoral college to popular vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b85afa8a563c,C65C1B3AA577,"the electoral college sometimes causes many crisis. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e5344f8175f,C65C1B3AA577,"It states in the article "" The single best argument against the electoral college is that we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in the century; the system allows for much worse.""
+
+This quote explains how the electoral college caused a fiasco in 2000 because of the electoral college and if we don't get rid of it we could have another one of these crisis. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10df5de8cf4c,C65C1B3AA577,"On the other hand the electoral college should not be taken away because our founding fathers established it. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+54ea11859823,C65C1B3AA577,"It states in the article ""Source 1: What is the Electoral College?"" ""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.""
+
+This quote illustrates how the electoral college is suppose to help us and noy hurt us. Also our founding fathers established so they were just trying to get everything in order and have peace with everyone. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82d453e949d2,C65C1B3AA577,the electoral college is very unfair because of the winner-take-all system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c4ec516aab2,C65C1B3AA577,"It states in the article ""Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why the best-laid of defense of the system are wrong"" ""At the most basic level, the electoral coolege is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state. canidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing on only the tight race in the ""swing"" states.""
+
+This quote explains how the electoral college is unfair and doesn't give chances to other states that supposively have no chance on voting for that certain canditate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+18dbc950399d,C65C1B3AA577,"All in all Senator the electoral college must be abolish. Not only does it create many disasters, but it is very unfair to us citizens. The electoral college is very old and we should give a break. We could start with something fresh like the popular vote and see how it turns out. As you can see there is many evidence on how the electoral college is bad and that you should give the popular vote a chance.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12100b4213de,C6B21B6E5767,"
+Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Let us going back in time to see how did get here. During revolutionary war in United State of American. Some british had education, but there was not school at the time. Being able to give education for students it was home. And this was for colonies teaching them in group how they can introduce by themeselves and understand command they are given. Late in 1800s to 1900s system changed by government of the time because it began to underatand how education was imporatant to the people. It began to build some classes, so people will not struggle for taking class at home or under the trees. The challenge was not is because the main points was money and people need to do this governement used one idea to increase tax for everything in able to finish the plan. That is how classes have been found. Time of technologies a rise was in middle of 1950s were people began to use new material like box computer and other stuff. Today we do have many choice as for school we may take classes onlline, pay tutor at home, or taking classes at school. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c98cc5eb6f7c,C6B21B6E5767,"What i have discoved is when you are taking classes at school your diverse yourself better that at home, or online. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+5a4f73d82f80,C6B21B6E5767,Yes i do think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cae63e6b963d,C6B21B6E5767,the challenge of studying at school wil not be similarity to the challenge of taking classes at home ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e2cbafceb505,C6B21B6E5767,"School does many things can reguard a students to stay focus. While, he or she is taking classes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f950b5483680,C6B21B6E5767,Take a look some examples: First your will be able to increase knowledge of communication all the time to anyone. Second you will have a chance to create a beautiful profile even you never think that you will have it. What i meant is when you are student you are a mirrow to other especially in our community becase school contain many difference cultures ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2872ee175559,C6B21B6E5767,Third is you will have extra help than home or online. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+00b2a7642f58,C6B21B6E5767,The specific idea of attending classes is to learn new things you never knew before. You know the way you may understood in front of the teacher it will not same the way you are watching video or reading online. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+067ef628d8f9,C6B21B6E5767,"Another thing you may see is some student the have many activities they attend like physical education, musical instruments, and some they are in clubs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1fe944c27a26,C6B21B6E5767,Which meenas you have benefit everywhere. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a4ad84178d4,C6B21B6E5767,"Moreover, taking clesses at school is still better options because the environment by itself is enjoyable ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f8edb750a5d9,C6B21B6E5767,"Making friends that you can have fun with, or they could help you when you are in diffuclt stuation. they are many things you will benefit from. As you taking classes at school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b6f5de1a2f8,C6B21B6E5767,"Some people may argue that is not fair whether you taking classes at school,home,or online you still have same education and academies in excellectual way ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cc72b74b81a8,C6B21B6E5767,Because you do have a schedule. They do have schedule. Your taking different subjects. They do taking different subjects. You do have many different options and other they do. And they think that the way student whose taking classes at home or online may have same view to the student whose taking classes at school ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b45f26602ea8,C6B21B6E5767,One of the highest point of this people who supporting the students are taking classes at home is. The student will have enough time to do many work than students who are taking classes at school ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a86e6d89213b,C6B21B6E5767,"You may choose to work other things and return to do your activity for school. And you may choose different options that none has choosed, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+696c8ef4c0c2,C6B21B6E5767,t that how they think i do not. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c74d6433f10f,C6B21B6E5767,The way students who are taking classes at school it will never become similar to the students who arevtaking classes at home. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b5d412699195,C6B21B6E5767,Another thing is to review the important stuation of student who are taking classes at school. Given point to this topic is to analyzing the main result from students who are taking classes at home and the ones are taking classes at school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0029cba29fa0,C6B21B6E5767,"the students classes at school always seems right than other. The way student behave, the way student handle task, and how much effort that he is using ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6f1a29619119,C6B21B6E5767,"at home student may cheat not body knows, whether he complited task or not. No one have to care. That the bid different you may see. Because is said the meaangless of student who work by himself he will never feel couragoues like other it is hard. Even to trust what he is doing sometimes nor always. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a8ef6380e6fd,C6B21B6E5767,"ON my cocnlusion i will adrress the creason that igiven on seoncd paragraph and i will adreress the description of difference i have given on paragraph four. And i will conclude the paragraph three as the last. One i given the reason of how stdent who are taking classes at school thay do have many benefit. Two i have given the description on paragraph four of how student who are taking classes at home, and student who are taking classes at school is not same classes at home have few benefit. Because the situation it may not be serious and this paragraph it is kind reason that i have given, but not necessary. Last and not least i was focus on paragraph three where i did not have things to saybecause is not strong argument , and ihave given one reason on it and few examples.            ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+2cdfe37d958c,C6C50AA537AF,"I am writing this letter to tell you to please let us bring cell phones to school I'm telling you that because sometimes I need a phone to call my mother for an emergency, like when I got tutoring, or when the school bus left me. I think that's to strict. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c6ad141dbfde,C6C50AA537AF,"I think you should let us bring cell phones to school at longest they're turned off, and letting us using them on the hallways, lunch, and at the gym ",Position,Adequate,,,
+26a4c3591c3d,C6C50AA537AF,"The thing that I don't like about bringing cell phones to school is that if you get caught with them they have to charge 5 dollars the first time 10 on the second time plus keeping them like for a month, 15 for the third time, and keeping them for the rest of the school year. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9d651038435a,C6C50AA537AF,"If you don't let us bring cell phones well don't let the teachers using them in class, because if we can't bring them well that's not fair to us. Will you please let us bring cell phones if somebody gets caught three times with a cell phone please don't let them bring them again, don't charge them ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+797fa3bdf414,C6C50AA537AF,"If you let us bring us cell phones we tried to get more serious, and pass al most every test we take. If you will let us bring cell phones I bet these school is going to be one of the most fun schools in SCHOOL_NAME. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f79c5b228347,C6C50AA537AF,"I think the reason that you don't let us bring cell phones is because some students don't pay attention in class, and they spend the entire class period texting. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+10e1cc6b4ed2,C6C50AA537AF,"So those are all my opinions of why you should let us bring cell phones to school. And cell phones are one of the most easier, and faster ways to communicate with somebody else. So that's all I have to say. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e8e914273893,C6CD02160C0D,I agree with the change in the policy. Maintaining a grade B average should not be too hard if you have a C average at the time. ,Position,Effective,,,
+10b8d9a54de0,C6CD02160C0D,students need to consider these extra curricular activities as privileges from working hard. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b010df8b741b,C6CD02160C0D,"The sports activities should be earned by putting forth best effort in your education. If students like sports and extracurricular activities, then they should think more about what they must do to participate in them. students need to think about their options first. Its sort of like cause an effect. If students get lower than a B average then it effects their chances of participating in extracurricular activities. Students must think about the consequences of their own mistakes. Just like many famous people today who act in movies and on television, they also had to work hard. I hard work is put into what you are trying to pursue then it can be accomplished or obtained. You just have to earn it. No one is just given anything in life. Those people earn what they have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9e3dce610fd7,C6CD02160C0D,"Changing the policy might influence more students who show great enthusiasm towards sports and other activities, to reach for higher standards because its something they want. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c024ffde8fce,C6CD02160C0D,"More students might get better grades because they have something to work for. This could open up students to a new way of learning. Students might notice that they have done so well just to play sports, that they might as well keep it up. More parents will be proud and students will get what they want. Students will learn that they must work hard to earn something. This could help them carry on in their lives an successful people. Just one situation can lead to great things. This will teach students to value hard work and dedication when trying to pursue a goal or dream. More students might understand why their parents work so hard everyday to support them. Parents are working hard to pursue their goal of raising a child that will succeed in life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+27bfd3e79ca1,C6CD02160C0D,Changing the policy could make a difference in these students view on hard work an commitment. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4a4f7cbbb905,C6DE30757F46,There are many issues concerning the Electoral College and whether to keep it or changing election by popular vote for the president of the United States.  The Electoral College is very important considering it has educated canadates.  The people do not understand that the United States has many uneducated people. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+e454a1075979,C6DE30757F46,"They do not realize that if there is no Electoral College, the people with education will vote to directly decide the president, but so will the uneducated people. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d82ccd3af3ed,C6DE30757F46,"The Electoral College wants the best for our country and is trying to benifit the USA, not cause it harm. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4941b77f9c14,C6DE30757F46,"Though the Electeral College is a benefit and means no harm, it does have its flaws. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+553199d67d6c,C6DE30757F46,"Many people when they vote for example, a democratic representative, they expect the democratic representative to vote for the democratic canadate for president.  Unfortununtly, sometimes that is not the case.  The democratic representative will end up voting for the Republican canadate for president.  This issue occurs many times in the Electoral College which is why people are having second thoughts about the Electoral College and wanting to eliminate it so that they can directly vote for the president or vice president they want and think will improve our country more. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1dcbb57cd73c,C6DE30757F46,The Electoral College is benefitcial because it is educated people trying to figure out by anallyzing and concluding who will represent and run our country the best way possible. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a4286446617,C6DE30757F46,"In the first article, it says ""MOST states have the ""winner-takes-all"" system"", ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a09ea97b392,C6DE30757F46,"but in the second article it says ""Because of the winner-take-all system in EACH state"".  ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+ddf790a31176,C6DE30757F46,"In the second article, one of the arguments as to why the Electoral College should be abolished is incorrect due to the fact that not every state has the ""winner-takes-all"" system.  Since they got imformation wrong, people can not count this article as a reliable source of information. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c5fbf8149adb,C6DE30757F46,"Our counrty has been doing very well compared to the other countrys like Korea, Africa, Cuba, China, and etc.  People should just be grateful and apperciative that the United States is doing as well as it is doing.  The Electoral College is a benifit and it should not be abloished or eliminated from congress, but it should be improved.  We as americans should try to advance our country in every way possible, not eliminate something if it does not go our way.  We should try to cooperate and improve on the mistakes to make our country better and progress everyday so that today is better than yesterday, and tomorrow better than today! ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f24866e6e175,C70EE5903373,"I beleive that we should get rid of the Electoral College. It may have been good and all back in the old days, but the Electoral College does not many voters the passion to vote today. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+42500adbf3ee,C70EE5903373,We should abolish the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7919a5b7891f,C70EE5903373,beacuse it will encourage more people to vote ,Claim,Effective,,,
+499b83630cd9,C70EE5903373,it is on the brink of catastrophe. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+df43afb35967,C70EE5903373,"To begin with, if we get rid of the Electoral College it will encourage more people to vote for Presidident. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c592866c3e00,C70EE5903373,"For example, as seen in the article, Republicans in California realize that their vote does not matter because Democrats tend to dominate in that state. The same can be said for Democrats in Texas who beleive their vote does not matter because Republicans dominate in that state. However, if the U.S had a popular vote, voters may think that there vote may mean more and will be encouraged to go out and vote for the President. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+862ebf303c0a,C70EE5903373,"On the other hand, you may argue that the Electoral College helps America have a better President beacuse in order to win you must do so in all regions of the country. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+404a080944df,C70EE5903373,"For example, Mitt Romney won pretty much the whole south region back in 2012 but did not become President because he did not gather enough Electoral Votes. Barack Obama had a more widspread tally of votes. But he counter to that he did win California which gave him 55 extra votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ba11aa6ba7c2,C70EE5903373,"Secondly, the Electoral College is on the brink of a amjor catastrophe and must be changed before it happens. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ebcbcbd00a4,C70EE5903373,"In paragrah 12, you see that just 5,559 votes that voted the opposite canidate would have made it a tie. That would be chaos. Because then the Electors of the Electoral College can then basically choose whoever they for President and not by what the people want. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e053a3bc5f4c,C70EE5903373,"In conclusion, we should abolish the Electoral College in order to encourage more people to vote and to stop a catastrophe that is bound to happen soon. Acorrding to a Gallup poll done in 2000, over 60% over the American people would rather have a popular vote. This just prooves that the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ebf4372ef8c4,C75B9C4FFEAD,Home school is a benefit that anybody could have. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4467c93be748,C75B9C4FFEAD,"Taking school at home would be better if you ask me, but it is not for everybody though. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a704a87482b6,C75B9C4FFEAD,Being home schooled is better then regular school because you got all day to do your work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a67207cfd529,C75B9C4FFEAD,"Some people don't work as fast as others and need to work at a different pace. If you're home schooled you can watch TV and relax while doing your work at the same time, if you can multi-task. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1f555a684de1,C75B9C4FFEAD,But Sometimes it could be a distraction from you doing all your work. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+fcfc05693a7b,C75B9C4FFEAD,"For an example, If you do home school you dont have to worry bout waking up early in the morning. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7b7b100fd69,C75B9C4FFEAD,People like me are not a morning person. Also if you missed the bus to school and got no transportation you're gonna be stuck at home. School could be on the other side of town and walking would take too long. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3aa3cab9a284,C75B9C4FFEAD,Attending classes online would give you the benefit of getting through school faster. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+413314d4b821,C75B9C4FFEAD,Doing home school will help you graduate 2x faster then usual if you doing all your work right. My brother was home schooled for 2 years and graduated at six-teen. Another thing is you can look up answers online to your work. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9d2e088d796a,C75B9C4FFEAD,"When you get home schooled you dont have to worry about teachers telling you what to do, but until you get that video call on your laptop. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b7318fdd3b00,C75B9C4FFEAD,"You can pull out your phone and talk without somebody saying "" Put your phone up and stop talking"". But sometimes your teacher that assigns your work will have a group conference call with you and a few other people in the online classes you got. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+de12d8efc427,C75B9C4FFEAD,Home school is better there's some downfalls for it. If you dont study and just look up everything online. Also you aint gonna have no friends to talk to nd joke around with while you doin your work. If your attention spand short home school is not for you. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b5ff4cfb4a4c,C77B4F63E4B4,"I belive that Electoral college is unfair in many ways, and maybe it would be good to keep the election by popular vote for the United States ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ca9cec0e39e6,C77B4F63E4B4,"The reasons why changing the election to Electoral college would be; smaller states would not see the candates because they would go to the bigger states like California, Texas and other states that are bigger then ohio or south carolina ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9f42d232abde,C77B4F63E4B4,"some of this states didn't even see a campaing ad how sad is that because this country is know for the equalness off every one but yet the electoral college forgets about seventeen states that are small because their vote doesn't matter.? 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3cfbc6037f77,C77B4F63E4B4,Keeping the election by popular vote would be the best. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+75900a40e230,C77B4F63E4B4,The fact that the people of the United States are able to see and vote for whom they perfer not the electors who elect the president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+78d3d3a527a7,C77B4F63E4B4,You might think that keeping the electoral college election is not as bad or unfair because it can help elect a president when the one of the presidents vote are majotite of vote it can help a run off election ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+fc077f1cc009,C77B4F63E4B4,but I beive the best way to select the president of the U.S would be by letting the people chosse what they think is the best so the people know they are noticed in this contry.  ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dfd84eaa9f94,C7A8E7FB21EE,I most likely disagree that the students and I must maintain a B or higher average to participate in gym and other activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a25ad8e8f0bd,C7A8E7FB21EE,"not all students are as smart as others. The students that have a C average or lower, should have a study period or a tutoring session. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fc1cba58ddd,C7A8E7FB21EE,"I think this because, some kids need a little extra help or push to help them understand the material that they are learning in class. Especially, if the students have the tutoring session, maybe the kids will comprehend and understand more. Which, if the students comprehend more, then they will have the privilege to participate in gym or in other activities.
+
+Also, if the student maintains a C or lower average, and they're in a tutoring session, I don't think it's fair that they're not allowed to participate in gym or other activities. In this case, I think the school should open up an after school program for gym or activities. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abcc3fae89ef,C7A8E7FB21EE,I do not think it is fair that students have to maintain a B or higher average to participate in gym or in other activities. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+9e006f21bb0c,C7C9C01597EA,I am against this because I belive it would create many arguments and I belive we are not ready for this yet. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+4e94cb25239e,C7C9C01597EA,I think they would get in more wrecks and malfunction. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63504799f366,C7C9C01597EA,"As told in the passage that the cas still need assistence for navigating through work zones and around accidents. I belive that the car would have many problems and cost alot of money. I feel that these cars would not work as well and not do the proper functions and still need to be tested before put out on the market for people to buy. As told in the passage gas prices may drop but the cars that are being made are gonna cost more, so are we really getting a better deal here? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1cc5235f0979,C7C9C01597EA,I think the reason society is trying to do this so bad is because of people influencing them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eaeeb4c9b029,C7C9C01597EA,"I don't think we are advanced enough yet where we can take on something this big. I belive we are not ready to take this big of a leap from comeplete control to a car driving all on its own. I think they should start by selling cars that they know people can trust and they can even start small and work they're way up to cars driving all on there own, but for now I don't think that we are advanced enough for them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e2c1400d7650,C7C9C01597EA,I do not think humans will have very much control over the car and if it ever malfunctioned and a human needed to steer and it never says it needs assistence then what? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+38c37a83e433,C7C9C01597EA,"I belive that these cars will wreck and not work as well as well as they think and its a waste of time and money. In the far future when they have tested them alot more and know they are safe for people to drive in, then I belive it is more appropriate. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+69737c9b86f8,C7C9C01597EA,These cars are going to create alot of contraversy between people and the manufacture. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ec804b25dbd,C7C9C01597EA,People will being trying to sue for malfunctioning cars and hurting them for not working correctly and wrecking. If one car with three people in it malfunctioned and they got hurt wouldn't you try to sue them for giving you a malfunctioning car? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+481fdb00fec9,C7C9C01597EA,I belive these cars are a bad idea and will not make society better or more advanced. I think that we should start slow and not plan ahead of ourselves. I disagree with these cars until we have tested them more and I hope that my point of view helped you understand why I disagree and how I feel. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+79c11ce4d7c4,C802F00716E0,"I think community service is a very good and helpful thing for the community, but I do not think students should be required to do community service. ",Position,Effective,,,
+0670b4caad92,C802F00716E0,It may help the community if students were required to do community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e10ee0999552,C802F00716E0,but many students choose to do community service voluntarily anyway. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0f0415886f50,C802F00716E0,When students do community service voluntarily they usually feel proud of themselves after they are done ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4ea0ab8e565d,C802F00716E0,"They know they have helped the community and this gives them a sense of accomplishment. If community service was required in school, students that did community service by choice anyway will not feel accomplished after doing community service if they had to do it. This takes away the feeling of accomplishment, and discourages students that used to do community service to do community service by choice anymore. Then all students will probably only do the bare minimum and it will not be helping the community since barely any people will do community service. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cf4c557d4136,C802F00716E0,"On the other hand, the students who thought community service was a waste of time, are probably students who do not do their homework from school anyway, so they will probably not even do the community service if it is required ",Claim,Effective,,,
+35a1ae0e2bb6,C802F00716E0,"So by adding community service as a requirement to school, it is not really helping the community, because just a few more people will be doing community service, and most of the people doing the service will not feel any sense of accomplishment. Also, the people who used to do community service will probably lessen their amounts of community service because it will not make them feel proud, so they would feel they are just doing extra for no reason. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8ab1aad60dba,C802F00716E0,"Community service is a very good thing to do, but I really feel that making it a school requirement will decrease the amounts of community service that is being done by students. As I stated before, requiring community service in schools will make community service stop being an activity that students enjoy, and so they will stop liking to do community service; which will have a bad effect on themselves and the community. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+72fd2d2ee050,C81BC69CEE2B,"Although many people think that the ""Face on Mars"" was created by aliens, I believe that it's just a landform. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+316fd735123f,C81BC69CEE2B,"Before spotting this landform, NASA had no further information on alien's on Mars ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e6d39810a1fa,C81BC69CEE2B,"Also, the camera that the team used was at its' maximum resolution, meaning that they wouldn't miss a thing. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eacd9925b735,C81BC69CEE2B,"Lastly, the team could enlarge the picture three times bigger, so they could see things located on the ground. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe51d2738e06,C81BC69CEE2B,"Before the team at NASA spotted the ""Face on Mars"" they hadn't heard anything about there being a possibility of aliens on Mars. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+072d641a6640,C81BC69CEE2B,"Therefore, I think It's highly doubtful that this could happen. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4030392ec7ae,C81BC69CEE2B,"Although the first look that the team took was a little hazy, they went back with a higher quality camera, which they set at the maximum resolution. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e71b75881b3,C81BC69CEE2B,With this camera it would be very unlikely for them to missunderstand an alien creation as a landform. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8281755840ab,C81BC69CEE2B,"Lastly, on top of having a high quality camera, the team could enlarge the picture up to three times bigger. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+860e19e28144,C81BC69CEE2B,"This helped them so much that it allowed them to see things as close as the ground. After this, it was positive they couldn't miss a thing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ccbd6bb51d9c,C81BC69CEE2B,"Considering that before the NASA team spotted the ""Face on Mars"" there was no further evidence of aliens living on Mars. Plus, with the extremly high quality camera that the team used, and the enlarging of the picture I believe that this is an extrodinary landform, alothough some prefer to assume differently. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+51b92eeff24d,C83EB6623D24,it would be very beneficial for our school to participate in community service ,Position,Effective,,,
+7a0af5d10b46,C83EB6623D24,"I see a community were there is no trash in the roads or fields, there are kids helping their elders, and even students wanting to help the community, this can be us. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+020deabe92b9,C83EB6623D24,Some of the activities that would easily be assessed are cleaning up trash ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ac44dfecca83,C83EB6623D24,caring for the elderly. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+74c6d2ae02df,C83EB6623D24,"because it can almost be treated like a field trip where students will be brought to a designated location where clean up is necessary and the students will clean up the roads and fields to have better land and less global warming because of the littered trash.
+
+This form of community service would be easy because it would take less than two hours, so the kids can leave the school and come back in the blink of an eye. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f2fd85b5e327,C83EB6623D24,"I believe this would be easy but a little more difficult to plan the picking up trash because the students will need to leave and come back from the homes of the elderly at different times so most if not all of the elderly citizens of our community can be helped and cared by the students at SCHOOL_NAME.
+
+In a result there would be less fatalities of the elderly by falling because of the students with them to help care for them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+02d53688be39,C83EB6623D24,"In Conclusion, I believe I will soon be able to see the day where our community is safe, where there is no global warming happening, where the streets and fields of our community are free of debris and the elderly are not frightened of getting too old where it is hard to see or walk because they will have children to rely on. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+97759dd158fa,C85EFB28D2F6,The b average requirement should not be revised. These extracurricular activities should only be allowed for the students who try the hardest in their classes. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+361d5cda0b4d,C85EFB28D2F6,Those students have earned themselves this and shouldn't share them with people that have anything less than a b average ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20f1741410e2,C85EFB28D2F6,This is coming from a middle school student who takes algebra 1 in 8th grade and is recommended for English honors for high school next fall. That isn't pleased with a single b in any class that gets straight a' s. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3fb8b6567113,C85EFB28D2F6,"A c average is required at my school for dances and other privileged things, I don't really care that a person that gets c' s or b' s has the rights that I'm entitled to ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b714292d88d0,C85EFB28D2F6,i know that i am very highly over them in academics and especially all sports. I bet i will go to a d1 university hopefully at NOTRE DAME for a starting wide receiver or cornerback position. In order to go to that prestigious d1 university you have to have a 4.2 gpa and a hell of a top football player in the country. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6d27d8cc574,C86A3BBC881C,"Many students might have a' C 'as an overall average, but taking away sports isn't really fair, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f56d912216c4,C86A3BBC881C,every kid needs exercise to keep their mind and body healthy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d429097595f,C86A3BBC881C,"Grades are important, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5449d33d9ae0,C86A3BBC881C,but so is the need to exercise. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+657fdab3e258,C86A3BBC881C,I could understand the fact of kid aren't putting enough effort into their work ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8f2300bfff3e,C86A3BBC881C,what if its not their fault what if their trying their best but they don't have any encouragement from their guardians ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+31f33ccd5eb8,C86A3BBC881C,"A possible solution is the student with an average of a 'B ' should get a more variety of activities available, that way everyone get all the exercise , needed ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87c530c7ad24,C86A3BBC881C,"Most of those grade 'C' students are just having a hard time , they shouldn't be punished for doing their best ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e85e324afd5,C86A3BBC881C,they should just spend some time reviewing simple mistakes they have made in the past. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+229bc9db67a1,C86A3BBC881C,taking exercise won't only make you unhealthy it . Makes your mind unable to work to its fullest extent ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fcb542721b83,C86A3BBC881C,"For some people doing activities such as basketball, baseball, and football allows them to relieve their selves to clear their head to be able to focus on the main task at hand. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+730a63bc92f6,C86A3BBC881C,I hope my reasoning will persuade or atleast give you second thought on changing the school policy. I am one of many students who believe it is wrong to change the school policy . ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8afb8cc799d9,C879A485810D,I think we shouldn't do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+165497d3d94d,C879A485810D,We have other stuff to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d024a71020cc,C879A485810D,We do not like to do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11009ebcd351,C879A485810D,If we do that we don't have time to do other stuff. I think community service is to much for us. I other people should do it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bb80e66702fe,C879A485810D,Like high school students should do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e79fb617b370,C879A485810D,I think not elementary school do that cause we are not really to do that. We is not fun to do community service. I think for high school students would it been better to do that. They are old to be doing that. They would clean better then elementary school. I think high school are better then elementary school. So i think you should make high school students do it. But it up to you principal if you want elementary school to do community service or you want high school students but think high school is better. They would clean nice and pretty. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5fb59d86a1c6,C8AEF0F632C0,I think policy 1 is the right policy because three reasons ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ce96106c8ee9,C8AEF0F632C0,why is its not disrupting class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96ddb6deb5b2,C8AEF0F632C0,emergencies ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83abbf361b0d,C8AEF0F632C0,let us have some fun for once ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b79f130a8573,C8AEF0F632C0,I also thinks its time for a change and I believe that this will bring up students grades. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3feb40f1c40e,C8AEF0F632C0,Now the main concern I know you are worried about is class being disrupt ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6a25002bfd2f,C8AEF0F632C0,well if there turned off in class how can class be disrupted? As policy 1 requires only use cell phones during lunch and free time that means the teacher is not teaching class when we have our cells phone out. And if a phone does go off in class take that students phone away not everyone's. That's just the first reason why policy 1 is the best. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d452fb7f851f,C8AEF0F632C0,Next this brings me to is emergencies ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b35b0695dc85,C8AEF0F632C0,"I feel that if 20 students in a class has a phone and a intruder comes at least half the students can call 911. Also if a student is sick just tell the teacher to use bathroom where the student can call him/her parent , instead of having to fill out a slip to the nurse and its not disrupting class. Now TEACHER_NAME
+
+that sounds good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dcac9b628974,C8AEF0F632C0,The last reason policy 1 is good is because we need to have fun ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+273ffca0dbfb,C8AEF0F632C0,All we do is work all day and never have a break unless you have physical education. Also students will be way more happier and would want to go to school to learn instead of being bored half to death. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9fa4a47e1532,C8AEF0F632C0,"
+Now that you have read this I will like you to think about policy 1 and how different school will be. From not disrupting class, emergencies, and letting us have some fun. Now you think about how school will be after that. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0ccdedef6c24,C8BF047C67E6,I think community service is a great idea for kids here at our school to participate in. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+928a6bc8c6a3,C8BF047C67E6,Kids are saying it takes to much time way ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+2768034b789c,C8BF047C67E6,"but, why be watching t. v when you could go help clean up litter to make a better environment for us. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d1492213d8eb,C8BF047C67E6,"In today's society people don't understand what all this pollution is doing to our world and animals.
+
+I feel that maybe if we got all the kids in school to participate in this then would could actually make a huge difference, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+96f73d3f359b,C8BF047C67E6,and maybe kids would spend more time helping and less time getting introuble. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+85af5046a840,C8BF047C67E6,"If these kids would realize what our planet will look like in ten years i think they would actually want to help. soon gas will go up a lot when we get about twenty, and things will change a lot if people keep being careless and littering.
+
+I would personally rather be helping save our community then be watching cartoons in the morning. I think most kids these days are spoiled so they see community service as ell why should i have to do it, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0638278232c6,C8BF047C67E6,"well there are plenty of good reasons. One to save the earth from being turned into a waste land, and knowing that you could help by doing something for your community feels great ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f380c284746,C8BF047C67E6,"The quote i live by when it comes to littering is, Reduce, Reuse, Recycle. Those three words aren't hard to do. I think you should enforce this rule and make everyone help because, what is so bad about recycling aluminum cans and paper. Today people waste way to much paper, and use way more water then what is needed. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef9af8a01010,C8BF047C67E6,"So turn off the sink when you brush your teeth, and instead of an hour long shower you really only need five. If kids helped a little bit more with this kind of stuff, maybe they would learn a word i like to use which is, Respect. Respect for the environment and anything else they might have. We could even start a recycling club at our school so kids could join in. I think all kids need to help out and we should require kids to help out. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+db17a5fa7e56,C8F314FFCCE9,the electoral college most be important that makes the people to chose what do they want ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+ac41eac1dde2,C8F314FFCCE9,"it consists to make the people take their own desiton about who do they want to help them and make their lives better in al the ways, the electors have to be near the people of the town or city cause in that way the people feels more closer to them and they can trust the work of the electors. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0679e782dd09,C8F314FFCCE9,the certificate of ascertainment declares that the winnig presidential elector in the state ans whows which elector will be represent the state at the meeting of the electors in december of the election year ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ca2378b2b2a,C8F314FFCCE9,that means that you help choose your state's electors when you vote for a president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c49b7b8fd0ab,C8F314FFCCE9,"because when you voete for you candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors.
+
+after a presidential election , the governor prepares a ""certificates"" of ascertainment""
+
+your state are sent to the congress and the national archives as part of the official records of the presidental election. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0bd926c25d3b,C8F314FFCCE9,"
+1 the author is trying to explain how does this works,to help the people of the town and especially that if you vote that means that you are helping to the elctors and that probaly wil not help if you dont choose the correct person.       ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+aa71b221b28c,C90418EBE934,I think its unfair to mandate community service. ,Position,Effective,,,
+51b95800b9a0,C90418EBE934,"Some people think its a great i idea to do community service, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ab44a6d4b456,C90418EBE934,but for some people it just takes to much time! ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+ba5a9b91edc2,C90418EBE934,"If we had more time on our hand then i would be all for community service, but don't have a lot of time to do anything after school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3fe8751b93ab,C90418EBE934,"Our teachers give us too much home work and not enough time to do it all and now if it becomes mandatory to do community service no one will have any time to do anything but homework and community service. That is unfair and unjust taking a way our personal time. Before the only time i had to myself was sleeping, and now i will have to spend that picking up trash. Or reading to the blind. Or tutor elementary school students. Or spending my time with old people that have Alzheimer's disease, who can even remember the last time they went to the bath room. That is a court sentence, not what you do for school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c894a27d1b5d,C90418EBE934,"I understand that what your considering doing is for a good cause. But leave community service to people who want to do it and can do it. Not to people that are being forced to. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+df90a9b31f9e,C9083A6A4955,I am a student at our school and I have some thoughts on the polices that you and the school administrations will be imposing over the next weeks. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1c87f27df1c4,C9083A6A4955,It is my belief that it would be in the best interest of all the students and teachers if no cell phones where allowed during school hours under normal circumstances. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d3b64f60bbc1,C9083A6A4955,"I think this is the correct option because, while at school a student's mind should be on the work he or she has been assigned and the job of keeping his/her grades up. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e4b96bbe3a3e,C9083A6A4955,"Cellular devices are a distraction from school work and assignments they keep a student occupied with social activities and interaction rather then the grades and assignments that the student has been assigned. Also a cell phone is not only a distraction for students but a hazard. Imagine if you will how hard it is carrying all your books and other school related items without distraction then amagin your cell phone going off in your pocket, of course you answer it but while pulling the phone from your pocket you trip and fall. it is much easer to fall and drop books or food while talking on a cell phone. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+286424638970,C9083A6A4955,"There is however one exception to the general rule of no cell phones. that is in the case of an emergency, such as a fire or a hostage situation. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+98b9285160b1,C9083A6A4955,Since these are risks that must be taken into account. I propose a compromise between the two extremes. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f3b83eef8fb9,C9083A6A4955,Student should be allowed to keep there phones on their person as long as they are turned off at all times during a regular school day. this then creates the problem of students texting during school hours and class so I propose that students who are caught texting or using the cell phone during school our not in the case of an emergency should have there phones took away for a set amount of time. much like if a student does something wrong he/she is punished with a certain amount of time. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+f9cb563931f5,C9083A6A4955,"I thank you for taking the time to listen to my thoughts, ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+70d6c0c45d4e,C9313379E449,"I Think Policy 1 Is Better Than Policy 2 Because phones Are Useful for Everyone. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+4b28b2a0a868,C9313379E449,Like Sometimes When You Get Out Of School And You Have To Tell Your Mom To Pick You Up Or To Tell Her Something Important You Need To Use A Phone But There Is No One To Let You Use It And That Is Why sometimes You Need To Bring A Phone to School. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5c60b85a440,C9313379E449,"So Principal I Believe You Should Allow Us To Bring Phones To School And Use Them During Lunch Periods And Other Free Times, And During Class The Phones Are Going To Be turned Off. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2c15e9a71f22,C9313379E449,"And If Somebody Uses It During Class, You Can Take Away Their Right To Bring Their Phones To School But Only To The Person That Used It During Class. I Think That's A Fair Idea. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+44416d6696da,C9313379E449,"
+So That's My Idea I Hope You Consider It Useful And I Hope You Choose Policy 1 Because If You Do A lot Of Students Are Going To Be So Happy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5691ade3a1b6,C93DCEE52172,"I think,that the electoral college should I will tell you right now. The electoral college helps us to avoid problems. So If there is no electoral college we will have problems and I dont want that in our country. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+91c7893cc0b3,C93DCEE52172,You may be thinking what do i mean by i dont want that in our country what I mean by that is that if there is problems I dont want that in our country cause are country is already free so I dont want it to have problems. And then if the United States fight it would not be free so think about that. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9eb28243b3b4,C93DCEE52172,Knowing their vote will not effect they will have less time to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+07e898b9a3e7,C93DCEE52172,By the way plurality means that when a candidate receive more votes than other candidates while not receiving a clear majority of votes. I think without plurality we would not have a president. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. You have to be 18 to vote in a election to choose your president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+160ad4be4bd8,C93DCEE52172,The electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that larges states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a31292db932,C93DCEE52172,"The popular vote was very close in florida. Nevertheless obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes. So, other thing equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does. So in other words a big state gets more votes than a small state does ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3b62ad1d7807,C93DCEE52172,From all these i typed i think i want the electoral college to stay were it is as in today.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1840f7aea280,C955208BEEC3,To have kids take community service is good for the world and it should be required to do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+29a4ca711ccc,C955208BEEC3,to clean up the school would help then people would do it but if it involves cleaning then some people will say yes and some no. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+88c738a6c0c4,C955208BEEC3,"but people like me would be happy to help and keep this city clean. And my friends wanted to join them in community service and i got in with them and now that the principal wants us to clean the school and to clean the litter was easy but the rest of the school was still unfinished. So then when we were almost done we cleaned the halls, class rooms, and helped the janitors mope certain areas and now our and community service is best to do ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eaa3bd040e26,C955208BEEC3,it also takes time away from your education. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e0ba032c059,C955208BEEC3,So the best thing to do is to have community service on some days and get people who want to do it so the choice is yes the principal should but get people that enjoy community service. And for example like if i were to be doing the service and i enjoyed it then id want to keep on doing it but is i didn't enjoy it then i would be home doing homework. But also have it after school and get people who can stay to perform the service. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3c8b3a0a30a9,C9962F63C98A,we know that is was now created by aliens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+22799f0b5838,C9962F63C98A,that there was no sign of them when we went to Mars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fa7489fb0d9,C9962F63C98A,Plus we know that it is to hot for there to be living creatures. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bfac37214d6,C9962F63C98A,Most all of us have has known that mars broke away from the sun that is why it is so hot there. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b4b06fbb385,C9962F63C98A,"Mars is a big hit in movies, books, magazines, and talk raidio shows.
+
+Some of the people that has went to Mars have taken pictured of what looks like faces in the outer layer of the planet. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e26dbc52cdcb,C9962F63C98A,"How we knew Mars is off of the sun is that it is close to it and it looks identical in almost all the ways possible.
+
+Mars is called the red planet cause of its enormous amount of red on it.
+
+which leads to say it is from the sun.
+
+Plus it is close to 100+ degrees on the planet plus the heat of the sun doesn't help that at all. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cadda44e4d33,C9962F63C98A,Researcher still wanna way to find out how to make it where people can live on any of the planets. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b9469720a3c5,C9962F63C98A,But there is one problem there is no oxygen up in space so those up there would die in a matter of seconds. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cc45ed98619a,C9962F63C98A,I think Mars could be a bad planet to keep going on cause there are more things thhat can go wrong up there ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fbfdb88c3f88,C9962F63C98A,"They risk lives every time they r up in space.
+
+If one thing is done incorrect the hole thing fails and then some lives amy be lost. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50eda9d24d11,C9962F63C98A,That is all i have to say about this topic of Mars.              ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+15d83bb60f34,C9CAB778C94E,"The Electoral College is best described as outdated and obsolete. It was designed so that, when there were too many states and poor technology, the vote could be fairly and reallistically counted, by voting between a few people from each state. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9e514421268d,C9CAB778C94E,"This was good and efficient for that time, but, with the technology available to us today, it is impractical and easy to corrupt. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a91159963389,C9CAB778C94E,"if you live in a mostly Democratic state as a Republican, your vote is regarded as nothing, and you would have no reason to vote in the electoral college, instead of throwing your vote into the entire mass of the united states, where it has a chance to even slightly influence the vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+986f432c138f,C9CAB778C94E,"Also, since larger states are given more attention, due to the all-or-nothing attitude of most states, other states are given less information and are forced to make more wild guesses than votes, a result of having less information. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e540379bab84,C9CAB778C94E,"When the idea of the Electoral College was introduced, the telegraph was still pretty hot technology. All votes would be counted by hand by an impartial court, counting off the vote of every single person individually, out of perhaps more than a million voters. Instead of this, each state would record their own numbers and dispatch a group of electors, who could not be influenced away from their vote, while sending a horseman or a few across the hundreds of miles of U.S. territory with a few little scraps of paper with votes on it would be impractical and dangerous. bags could be lost, a rider could have an accident, entire counties would be unaccouted for. The Electoral College was a nessecity as well as a stroke of genius, and I applaud the man who thought of it. However, this was when the telegraph was a stroke of genius, too. Now we have a cell phone the size of a notecard that can store thousands or millions of votes alone. We have processors that can count the number of people that like apples versus oranges and come out with a percentage, verdict, reciept, and the best bussines option as soon as the numbers are input, as soon as we push that little blue ""Enter"" button. We can send the votes through the air in the billions, without as much as wires to conduct them. there is little or no possibility of tampering or miscommunication, and there are records to back up and correct every single little error. it is much smarter, safer, and more accurate to initiate a simple counting program on the computer, with each individual terminal sending all of it's results and information to a higher terminal until all of the information is scored, backed up, double checked, counted, percentaged, and a final verdict is reached. This can even be done in a way to run the information separately to different computers, to minimize tampering. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+69da5bed9d5b,C9CAB778C94E,"The electoral college is obsolete, a small parasite of politicians who just dont want this to end. we dont still use the telegraph, do we? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ea8402be6ad8,C9CAB778C94E,"The electoral college is not only obsolete, unnesessary and parasitic, but also unfair to many voters. The main ways this unfairness can be identified are extreme, and each really deserve a paragraph of their own. Let us imagine a scenario: a democrat lives in a mostly republican state ",Claim,Effective,,,
+40a2bdbab651,C9CAB778C94E,"He goes to vote. His vote is passed along, checked off, and placed aside for a time. When all of the votes are in, the republican votes outweigh the democrats. Now, our democrat's vote, his wife's vote, the democratic guy who works at 7-11 down the street's vote, Joe's vote, Bob's vote, Billy's vote, ""That girl Suzie's"" vote and ALL THE DEMOCRATIC VOTES IN THE STATE are all, essentially, thrown into the furnace, and will do so next election, the election after, and essentially every mostly republican election after that. In a popular vote without the barrier of the Electoral College, all those votes would flow into the pile for whichever canidate they voted for. Then the pile would be counted, divided into the total votes, and percentaged. then, at lest the votes could count for SOMETHING, other than a waste of time. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b67cd6bd3caa,C9CAB778C94E,"But wait! there's more. Most states have an all-or-nothing ideal, meaning if politician A got 51% of the votes in California, while politician B still got 49%, Politician A gets 55 votes in the Electoral College, while politician B gets squat. This does not represent the best interests of many of the people in that state. this is unfair ",Claim,Effective,,,
+589368e771bf,C9CAB778C94E,"It also means that larger states have the advantage, because they get more votes, like California (55), Texas (38), and Florida (29), while smaller states get less, such as Alaska (3), Rhode Island (3), and Hawaii (4). Just to add insult to injury, this means that larger states are more fought over by politicians, leaving smaller states practically ignored. This is unfair to people in the Dakotas or Montana have no information to base their votes on, instead just picking a canidate by mainly party affiliation. the biggest political battles are in fact fought over the biggest states, in the forms of advertisements and propaganda. Although the propaganda is truely just that: propaganda, there is some truth in them, and the voters in bigger states are more well versed in the political and practical advantages of one canidate over the other. Article 3, while defending the Electoral College, in fact condems itself, by saying that voters in so called ""swing states,"" where there is no true dominant party, are likely to be given the most information on the canidates as they battle over who will get that state's votes in the college. The same thing can be said for the bigger states, because neither politician can really afford to let the other gain the upper hand in that state. Therefore smaller states, or states that are basicly marooned on one party are ignored or disregarded as worthless and unattainable in any case, so they widthold information from them, forcing them to vote blindly in favor of whichever party they choose, which votes may be discarded anyway. With an uncensored popular vote, the political canidates will be forced to advertise for all of the united states, instead of just the bigger or indevisive states. this will also remove all of the unfair advantages from the larger states, including more information as well as an unfairly weighted voting system. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1f97ad524c7,C9CAB778C94E,"In conclusion, the electoral college was the most efficient and sucessful way to vote, back in the 1700-1800. However, with current communication and transportation technologies, the College has become obsolete, to the point where it should be buried at a crossroads with a stake through it's heart. It is unfair, biased, impractical, and just overall worthless. We should put our newfound technology and knowledge to use and do away with the electoral College, once and for all.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2845cf5f6741,C9CB05ABAE95,I believe that you should select your first policy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e591956bba41,C9CB05ABAE95,If students can have there phones out during free time and lunch periods than they will be less likely to use try and use the in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aac28e9f448d,C9CB05ABAE95,"During school kids complain that they are not able to use there cell phones at all in school, but if they could use them during free times than they could talk with friends then and not have a need to during class. Think of what would happen if you go with the second policy, students will try and talk to friends during your teachers classes. When the students use there cell phones in classes they worry more about number one, getting caught and number two being able to talk to there friends ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c8bbbe314325,C9CB05ABAE95,Most schools worry that students that have internet capability will post mean things about other students on social networking sites. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6f44faf23ba,C9CB05ABAE95,"You cant stop students from posting it at there homes, so they will do it there instead so you cant prevent that from happening. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a2f5cb25a21,C9CB05ABAE95,"If you select the alternative policy, and not the first policy than students would not be allowed to have them of use at school at all ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+051d99817c43,C9CB05ABAE95,If they were not to be of use than students would make it a game or a competition to see who can text the longest without getting caught by the teacher. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7dca13f2928,C9CB05ABAE95,It would be better to have them at use in school because than students that want to learn can and the students that don't want to learn repeat the same classes until they pay attention enough to pass there class. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+635ecd160d11,C9CB05ABAE95,"Not being able to have a cell phone out at any time of the school day would be a bad idea. Having cell phones out during free time in the day would be a much better selection. Having cell phones out during class is a bad idea, but during their free time is there free time to do anything they want that is school appropriate ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b165c5d6cb30,C9D717A3D912,The Electorial Collage should continue on as a way of electing for various resons with this in play ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e1855d4f8e67,C9D717A3D912,"""it avoids the problem of elctions in wich no candidate recieves a majority of the voters cast""(source 3), ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3894118bf89e,C9D717A3D912,"which would reduce the complication process to produces a clear winner"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa07f0980f46,C9D717A3D912,"Next,this has gone on for centry's its in our constitution thank's to our founding fathers (source 1) ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd7a9222eee8,C9D717A3D912,also there is less of a dispute of the outcome versus a popular vote.(source 3) ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+848f15f24ba5,C9D717A3D912,a process that simplifies the entire states personal elections is definantly a pro ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b2c711e26ca,C9D717A3D912,yes this system is we the people actually voting for our state elctors ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+45f3478889c2,C9D717A3D912,but we have chosen them and they are more informed on this compromise so they should  be entitled as two votes. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+855fee0e7ac4,C9D717A3D912,Plus for example in wich no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast and should be kept this is Given that the votes outway the elctorial vote with the process of the college electorial vote enshuring a fair election ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+949a7bd369f7,C9DFA1392E8C,"Our system of driving has been implemented for a long time now.
+
+Driverless cars would be a huge leap in technology.
+
+There are so many cars on the road right now that require drivers and almost next to no selfdriving cars. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c014fe0160eb,C9DFA1392E8C,"Sel driving cars in theory sound like a good idea, but in all reality they aren't. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ddfd3779e65f,C9DFA1392E8C,"The first and biggest issue is cost, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e436bd8e2748,C9DFA1392E8C,"the self driving car will have nearly everything our current cars have, in addition to all the high tech sensors and a very exspensive Dubbed LIDAR that uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.
+
+Also they're talking about putting in camera's on the rearview mirrors and a camera that watched the driver.
+
+The cost of repairs will be a a necessity because your car will have to be in working order or else it will not drive itself and you will not travel, and in this day and age you have to be able to travel. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c021066de50,C9DFA1392E8C,implementation. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+475c51c17b40,C9DFA1392E8C,"How will driverless cars implement their product into the general populus?
+
+Will there be a mix of driverless cars and driver operated cars?
+
+If so, that sounds dangerous.
+
+Theere is no need for drivers to be on the road with experimentall technology that is new and has never been used.
+
+The chances of a problem or accident are enormous ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae3986f79860,C9DFA1392E8C,"change, drivers who use this new car will most likely feel a sense that something is missing as in they aren't doing anything like steering or breaking. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+31c1770c0c80,C9DFA1392E8C,"They will not be used to this and feel the need to do something that will distrract them from being alert.
+
+Selfdriving cars will be so new and so different that many Americans will shy away because the change is too significant. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+848cb0963fe8,C9DFA1392E8C,"there is already a working system in place and to try and change that system on that big of a scale will create numerous problems that may not be solved.
+
+The three big issues are cost, implementation, and change.
+
+The scale at which this change would happen is just too great.
+
+In addition it is too risky to make a slow implementation because the mix of car types would create many problems as well. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+15b3a56c75c2,CA12A5A210FF,"I am aware that you want your students to do well in school. Everyone, even if they don't admit it, wants to do good in school. I agree with your policy, and I also disagree with your policy. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fc62a94d2079,CA12A5A210FF,"I agree with it because I think if the students really wanted to participate in activities, they must raise their grades. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e0cce83b326,CA12A5A210FF,"But if they really wanted to participate, they can all work hard to get their grades up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6a94b85d3336,CA12A5A210FF,"Well, I also disagree with your policy. I think if some kids really do struggle in school, they wont be able to participate in any other activities. I don't really think that is fully fair. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+162c02b3782e,CA12A5A210FF,"Us students want to participate in fun activities and some really struggle. We all need time to get away from school to have fun and your not letting some students have that time. I am an average B student, and I do not participate in other activities like sports.
+
+I really have no right to say anything, but I am supporting my friends who love sports. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa790d973466,CA12A5A210FF,"I do mostly agree with you. If you really want something, you should try your hardest to aim for it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cc6567d15978,CA12A5A210FF,"Say, you wanted to play basketball and you had a C average. If you have a C average, you cannot play ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+06e97fe2dbdd,CA12A5A210FF,"If you really really want to play basketball, try to get a B average to aim higher and higher in life. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7675dde0285f,CA12A5A210FF,"I think your policy will give us students a lesson to learn to aim for your goals and learn to know if you really want something, you must try your hardest to aim for it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5059135797a4,CA2A9DBBA0BC,Hve you ever been in an argument before? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+fa2db2fa655b,CA2A9DBBA0BC,Well I am goingto try and persuade you that the face are a natural land form. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c622a0ae90d7,CA2A9DBBA0BC,"First I will talk about the way I know that the face are not created by aliens or something. So lets get to it 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9276e6bd44c6,CA2A9DBBA0BC,"So now in the paragraph I am going to provide you with facts and details from the rticle of why I think it is a natural land form. First If this really is a face made by aliens or something where is the rest of the body? Also We as on earth NASA says that they have never seen or recorded a real life alien. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eb4045926934,CA2A9DBBA0BC,If aliens did make this ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+14509387266a,CA2A9DBBA0BC,it would be in the news because come on how many aircrafts are sent into space a day most likly about one ever day. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3f04a33bfd94,CA2A9DBBA0BC,"And we also have a satilite up in space and I bet you Countries like Russia, Canada, and probaly even the British have one up in space. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8894781d42a1,CA2A9DBBA0BC,"And if something like that happened I would hope one of those satilites would see that happing.
+
+And for all you and me now is that are moon has craters in it. Right? So craters happen ever day so could something like this happen I would think so.
+
+And NASA also said that they did there reserach by pictures taken by the space shuttles and very accurte drawing of the ""Face"" not done by conserise theroys. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a523703d2af8,CA2A9DBBA0BC,In conclusion Those were some of my best argument reason of why I think the face is a natural land form not a face that was made by aleins. So thos eare my reasonings. So what do you think it is? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ceacca39ec80,CA2C96F5B3B7,"Hello, my name is Lisa, and i'm a scientist here at NASA. I have heard that you claim that aliens have created this landform we found on Mars. 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d61e2a9887e6,CA2C96F5B3B7,There has not been any life found on Mars at this momment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37fb7b4a2018,CA2C96F5B3B7,"It does look like it could be from another living organism, but it's just a rock on the planet. In our newest image of the rock, it turns out that the face has dissapered. There is no evidence of this being created by aliens, rather it was created by wind and water that has been found on Mars. The reason you might believe that this was indeed aliens, might be the fact that the news has blown it out of poportion. It's just the rock that had some interesting shadows and holes that made it look like a human face. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+735d4c1968a4,CA2C96F5B3B7,"all i'm trying to say is that it cannot be aliens, it's just a rock on Mars. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ab9312dc87d1,CA4E39042770,"I agree with that, because some student's would not come to the school, this a huge opportunity for us, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5456081953f9,CA4E39042770,we have some reasons to take classes in online because we missing to much classes for us graduation ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9769cde2a362,CA4E39042770,it's easy organize our own time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8ad6e5a08318,CA4E39042770,"It's important to study because all of us, want to be a professional. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d57185700307,CA4E39042770,"In some cases the student's prefer to come at the school, but I believe that for mejority of us, is preferable to take classes in online, because we don't have troubles with anyone and we can do the classes in anytime. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+db3809cd3583,CA4E39042770,"For example; Many of students had job, and they have to work sometimes in the night also in the day, but they make an effort to complete their study. I am working really hard in my classes, and manytimes is very stressful. I want to take the advanced diploma, but I miss one class, so here I have the opportunity to take in online. In my opinion these is really important for us because is a help to continue a life less stressful. Something that I like is to pass time with my family and share with they, but I don't have time because I have to come at the school and I get to many tasks, exchange if we take classes in online we can do many things. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2bd41aab69d8,CA4E39042770,In addition, is good to come at the school but for the senior students is more preferable to take classes in online beause we begin to work in restaurants or another places ,Claim,Effective,,
+6b98ba4d1d94,CA4E39042770,I want to have this experience of not coming at the school and take my classes in online and I want to learn new things to develop my abilities. It's a good idea to know that we have more options to take classes when we take classes from home we have the advantage to sleep more. Students would benefit in this way because we want to do different things and not come to the school almost all day. For example: I want to travel but i can't because I have to come at the school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d9cbf15e3de9,CAE2A78F6FF2,"The Electoral College is used in the United States to elect a president, yet it is higly debated over whether it is needed or not. The Electoral College was founded to compromise the election of a president between the people and Congress, to try to avoid problems between both parties. Many people allign themselves with one side to argue that it is needed to eliminate unfair advantages, or that it is not needed because it doesn't give the people the power to elect their president. This brings up disputes and controversy especially in situations that give evidence to support both cases, such as the 2000 presidential election between Al Gore and George Bush. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7633d06e4347,CAE2A78F6FF2,The Electoral College should be kept in use ,Position,Adequate,,,
+79a49180b8fe,CAE2A78F6FF2,it provides a fair representation and campaign for all regions ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d475255bb5ae,CAE2A78F6FF2,allows votes from states with fewer population numbers to have significance ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fc8abd37112b,CAE2A78F6FF2,avoids the issue of trying to determine the president when neither receives the majority vote ,Claim,Effective,,,
+17351b2e2ffe,CAE2A78F6FF2,"To begin with, the Electoral College should be in use because it provides fair representation for all the states involved in the election. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+df16a7943ae7,CAE2A78F6FF2,"The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal."" ""This is a desireable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president."" This shows that it is beneficial because it makes a candidate who has only regional appeal, have to work harder in other states to show that he would be fair to all states, not just the ones that support him. Furthermore, it allows for massive regional advantages, like the South, mean nothing because they would still have to convince the North to vote for them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dab2dd2e3a8b,CAE2A78F6FF2,"The opposing side might argue that if a candidate has regional appeal, they should just let that win them the election ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+221ae60fd968,CAE2A78F6FF2,"but a successful president should be able to sway the whole country into voting for him, not just a certain region. Thus, showing that regional advantages prove meaningless with the Electoral College, making it less unfair to other regions. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+18c3a0f8be31,CAE2A78F6FF2,"In addition, the Electoral College eliminates the unfair advangate of having a bigger state, allowing smaller states to have a significance in the election ",Claim,Effective,,,
+730ec0d92b18,CAE2A78F6FF2,"The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution."" This shows that large states can sway the whole election, while small states don't make a dent on it, without the Electoral College in place. Thus, using it allows smaller states' votes to matter in the election, while eliminating large states' advantage over them ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+17f3e1301341,CAE2A78F6FF2,People might claim that large states deserve more representation because more people live in them ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+8d0327bcfb4d,CAE2A78F6FF2,"this doesn't preserve the equality for other smaller states's citizens that the United States stands for. This makes it apparent that without the Electoral College only the ""big states"" would matter and the candidates wouldn't have to worry about the small states. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+da7729b4c76e,CAE2A78F6FF2,"Finally, the Electoral College does its best to eliminate the issue of not being able to determine the winner when the majority vote does not differ. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+be3df8fc07c0,CAE2A78F6FF2,"Most states have a winner-take-all system that  awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate."" This stops the problem that occured in 1968 with Nixon and 1992 with Clinton, and provides a clear definite way to choose the winner. If the Electoral College wasn't in use, lengthy recounts and much controversy would follow elections to try to determine if the votes were fair; this would cause too much strife and unrest within the country ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+317b31913b35,CAE2A78F6FF2,It can be argued that even with the conflict it provides the people a chance to make their votes count ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a151b1a16ac5,CAE2A78F6FF2,"but it does more harm than good and it doesn't truly change anything. As a result, the Electoral College solves the issue of uncertainty and significance of vote. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6962b7ecb12b,CAE2A78F6FF2,"In essence, the Electoral College is necessary for the balance and order in the United States to remain. It provides a fair representation and campaign for all regions, allows votes from states with fewer population numbers to have significance, and avoids the issue of trying to determine the president when neither receives the majority vote. This all shows that fewer problems arise when using this procedure, rather than if they use majority vote. ""You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors."" This shows that the citizens still have power in choosing their candidate and it creates a balance with other parties. In conclusion, the Electoral College should be kept to preserve the integrity and equality the United States is all about.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c2ad1cab2ff4,CB09A5442145,The  electoral  college  is  where  people  go  to  vote  for  President  and  also  our  vice  President. Each  canidate  has  his  or  her  own  group  of  electors. Every  elector  is choosen  by  the  canidate's  political  party.  Also  each  elector  is  carefully  selected  and are  aware  of  thier  responsibilties.  Ounce  you  vote  for  your  canidate  you  are  actually voting  for  the  canidates  electors. Which  helps  the  state's  electors  choose  who  is  fit for president.  The  presidential  election  happens  every  four  years  on  a  tuesday  in Novemeber. There  are  at  least  538  elector's  that  atend  the  Electoral  college. Also there  has  to  be  at  least  270  votes  to  elect  the  president. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+fbe470c65f96,CB09A5442145,"People  may  think  when  they  go  out  to  vote  for our  new  president  they  are  voting for  that  one  person  but  they're  not, you  are  actualy  voting  for  a  bunch  of  electors. There  is  a  group  of  people  from  the  goverment  that  get  together  and  select  each elector  that  is  trusted  to  vote  for  the  party's  nominee ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f9963947fadd,CB09A5442145,There's  five  reasons  for  the Electoral  College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+16c0624af2d4,CB09A5442145,One  is  certainty  of  outcome ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+882380e3d17a,CB09A5442145,"everyone's president, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+416a69011a61,CB09A5442145,"swing  staes, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+be69b963a136,CB09A5442145,big states ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b9c2d2be30df,CB09A5442145,avoid  run-off  elections. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+09373123f468,CB2385831D75,"""Honey, could you go to the CVS and get me some nyquil.
+
+I'm dying here,"" mom says.
+
+""Yeah, I'll be back in a bit.""
+
+I grab my keys from my pocket and head outside. I unlock my new driveless car and climb in. ""Take me to the CVS,"" I tell the car. It roars to life and backs out of the parking lot. It's been not even two miles and this thing is starting to glitch. ""You will be taking possesion of this car in five minutes, ma'am,"" the car commands. I panic and take hold of the violently shaking steering wheel. Traffics harsh tonight meaning there's some kind of party out in town. The driveless car just unexpectedly starts going in the wrong direction, making me go in shock.
+
+Before I do a full turn I see a lady talking to her baby inside the car. I try to brake, but it just won't budge. I pray that I won't do any harm to them. Unfortunetly it does. I run smack into the front rear, making me black out. They say that before you die, your life flashes back through your eyes. But mine didn't.
+
+I instintly think of mom, dying there in her room, waiting for me to come back. But I won't and this is all because of this driveless car. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1e7cf4ced41e,CB2385831D75,driveless cars are not safe ,Position,Adequate,,,
+00cfc958365c,CB2385831D75,"it can harm people, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+31fb9b9498fe,CB2385831D75,"it's new technology is very unfamiliar, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b69b63af4452,CB2385831D75,it is not as driveless as you think. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7b7bd38ee002,CB2385831D75,"If you think harm is done only to you, then you are wrong. You can injure lots of people with only one lifeless car. A car with a mind that could turn into your enemy. It might seem a great idea to most of all over social media, but once they buy them then you will harm then. Not only will they sue the company, but have a bad record on there shoulders. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d71d5ff9b14c,CB2385831D75,"You won't know what is in this bizzare car that is being monitored with itself. And as the article says, it will also monitor you.
+
+I think that this is not just crazy but scary too. And with this new technology you won't learn to handle a car by yourself, and I would want to. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+621b5f848024,CB2385831D75,"It will say that it drives itself. It will eventually come to some point where the car can't handle the heavy traffic and pass it on to you. Yep that's right, you get to control a car that does not want to be handled.
+
+A driveless car is a facade for hidding the real truth. Because that's what it's doing.
+
+Hiding the truth. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e0441d1bd097,CB2385831D75,"These driveless cars I've been telling you about won't make this world any better.
+
+Imagine Earth being invaded by robots. That's right, the new apacolypse. You see these can be extremely dangerous to the environment and the people inside the car. This new technology can't be acurate. There can be some huge change in it that you won't see it coming from two inches away.
+
+And this driveless car being controlled but not by its driver is a false fact. You will eventually drive it too. But this new experiment may be the cause of not returning to your home and giving your mom that nyquil that she wanted so badly because she was dying. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c8146330825e,CBC776495BE0,"Americans around the world gather around their televisions, frantically waiting to see who the next leader of the USA is. The first Tuesday of November is always an exciting time for American citizens. Citizens watch the number of votes go up, thinking their vote counted, when in reality, it did not. Many people are aware of the electoral college. The electoral college are the ones truly voting for the United States leader. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3772d2bddf52,CBC776495BE0,"While we may have had this process for years, it's time for us to take a vote to change the way we vote. Citizens of the United States of America should be able to vote by popular vote ",Position,Effective,,,
+192d1800eb7a,CBC776495BE0,the electoral college is outdated ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c533557367e,CBC776495BE0,ruins the American freedom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c0146a6cc8e,CBC776495BE0,"The world we live in now compared to the 1800s is very different. We've upgraded, not only in our inventions, but our states as well. The electoral college was made when America was first established because it was fit for the needs of that time. The Office of Federal Register states, ""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between the election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" Back then, it was needed to balance things out among the 13 colonies. In those times, we didn't have the advance techonology we have now to see our candidates on screens or in person. Since then, we've turned 13 colonies into 50 states, turned horses into cars, and small radios into televisions. Rules and laws change to fit the current needs all the time. The electoral college should do the same. Due to the fact this system has been around since the founding fathers, major mistakes occur ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5d6c9702d377,CBC776495BE0,This process is too old to keep up with the third largest population in the world ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f6914542f1d4,CBC776495BE0,"Bradford Plumer of source 2 tells us that in 2000 ""Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral college--won the popular vote but lost the presidency.""  If this is truly a land of democracy and of the people, how could we let such a mistake happen? How could we let majority of citizens vote but not get the person they choose ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+beecd961474e,CBC776495BE0,Another factor to this problem is the American freedom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+58adf6ea2e30,CBC776495BE0,"The electoral college imposes on the American freedom and right to choose their president. The United States of America is a representative democracy. The citizens choose who they want to lead but those votes aren't truly their own votes. According to Richard A. Posner of source 3, ""...the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense...it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidental candidate, you're actually voting for a slate of electors."" American citizen votes do not matter as much as we think they should. The founding fathers built this country for the people. The people should have an actual voice in who they want to lead this great nation. In addition, Americans should have a direct say. Votes should go straight to the president and not the party's electors. This is not only fair to citizens but also a more relible plan. Bradford Plumer of source 2 explains to us that """"faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please..."" We can't depend on these electors to determine one of the most important things of this country. We can't depend on these ""faithless"" electors to vote who we want when they might do the opposite. Voting by popular vote prevents these mishaps and restores our democracy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2621fb1e1b38,CBC776495BE0,"While others may claim that the electoral college is beneficial to candidates because of big states, small states, and swing states ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+39e921837712,CBC776495BE0,it's a one-sided deal ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+3ea54909a2e3,CBC776495BE0,"It may be beneficial to candidates but what about the voters? Source 2 reads ""during the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad."" If these candidates expect to lead the third largest country (population wise), they should have to put out the extra effort to visit and campaign to every state. The candidates need to show they care for this country and they are here for everyone. If they cannot put in the extra effort to see the lives they are going to change, do they deserve to be president ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7ecf7ed740e7,CBC776495BE0,"All in all, the electoral college is no longer needed to today. The electoral college is made for the modern world and also disrupts our representative democracy. Times are always changing, we, as a society, are always changing, and the electoral college needs to change as well. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+8d80836756e5,CBD364987E2D,I believe that cell phones should be allowed in school around free time and at lunch periods. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3b2f08a8cf95,CBD364987E2D,I think that the kids at schools would be a lot happier with more freedom. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a65731bd6ca4,CBD364987E2D,"I also, think that with more freedom would become more responsibility, and i think that the students in the school could handle having their cell phones out during passing time and also during lunch periods. Many people would like to have that freedom of having our cell phones out. Also, i think that if we were able to have our cell phones and do things with them then we would be a lot happier and things would be a lot better at Warren Woods Middle
+
+School ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dc4fb3aa6921,CBD364987E2D,I think that in classes cell phones could be used a lot with different assignments. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e13c7832124b,CBD364987E2D,"Such as we could be texting a teacher our answers or looking things up. Also, you could play the quiet game and then just have our phones and then we could be texting each other back and forth about question and other sorts of things ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+825e6ef5348e,CBD364987E2D,"I think that if we were allowed to have cell phones in school then we would only be able to have them outside of the class room and if had them any where else then we would have to get them taken away and also, then maybe cell phones would be band from schools. I think that the principal should be able to trust us to have our cell phones. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3b99fb84210,CC4EEADA5262,Driverless cars are very unecessary and will only cause trouble that can be avoided. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+16178a3e7941,CC4EEADA5262,"These cars are unecessary, because driving is not one of the huge problems in the world. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+35b28fae1b1a,CC4EEADA5262,"A lot of other issues should be viewed as more urgent to take care of, than the development of cars that do not need people behind the wheel and in control. They will only cause problems, because they can easily get into accidents, among many other issues. It was just spoken about this week in the news: Google's car got into its first accident. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+17c2415aeb6e,CC4EEADA5262,"In order to completely transfer over to driverless cars, a lot of things have to be changed and developed ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b8bb4baa776,CC4EEADA5262,"Not only are the cars themselves problematic (they are not even able to react around an accident site), but there are no laws stating who is responsible if a vehicle with no driver causes an accident to happen. Who is held responsible in the end? A prediction some can make is that many lawsuits will be formed against both the maker of the vehicle, and the driver behind the wheel. The question will also arise that if neither were in control, can you blame something such as a car? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5e4ae09788de,CC4EEADA5262,"Another problem that the cars could create, is a huge spending issue ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d4bfcc989e03,CC4EEADA5262,"In the article it is stated that a certain device ""cost two hundred million dollars."" That is a lot of money to spend on the system for one car. And the cars need many sensors in order for them to run smoothly, such as,"" a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors,"" and that might be roughly half of all one car needs. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fddc18c1c715,CC4EEADA5262,Another problem that could arise is the conditions of roads. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+234d58febf41,CC4EEADA5262,"Many of the driverless cars that the article states have been developed have needed specific conditions in order to function correctly, such as ""a special test track"" or ""magnets with alternating polarity."" How would those cars function in an everyday situation out on the open road? Not very well. So how would they be able to develop a vehicle that can operate on a true highway, as well as on the many other types of roadways in the world? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84b09f6adcfb,CC4EEADA5262,"An issue that should be brought up also, is that none of the developed vehicles have been completely driverless. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a805d1741baf,CC4EEADA5262,"They need humans to do certain things for them behind the wheel, such as navigating crash scenes. What happens if a driver who is bored while their car drives for them forgets to be paying attention? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6e708460cfb8,CC4EEADA5262,"driverless cars are not something that should be stood for. They will only create trouble that is not needed in the world, and can possibly lead to way bigger issues, such as in our economy. The development and actual distribution of these cars would be something unprecedented and who knows what could come of unprecedented things. In reading this article, it was easy to pick out things that could go wrong, and reasons it would not be in the world's best interest to go further in the development, but it was a lot harder to pick out what could go right and how these cars could help the world. If something might do more harm than good, why do it? ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+15b735b90844,CC5894978F31,"The Electoral College is a cruel, pointless process that simply makes a percentage of votes, or all of them if you look at it that way, to mean nothing, and allows for circumstances like the 2000 election. ",Position,Effective,,,
+698410f61020,CC5894978F31,"There are plenty of reasons, and plenty of contradictions in ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to kep our despised mehod of choosing the President."" 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+56e27c713407,CC5894978F31,"To begin, the winner-take-all system is very unfair to the voters. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7cb5c9989b98,CC5894978F31,"Voters in certain, dominated areas are supposed to know what they are voting for, yet get nothing to teach them? Not that it matters regardless, since every person within a state supports a political party, right, and, depending on your state's veiw, all Republicans/Democrats have no idea what they are voting for, correct? Like Bradford Plumer says, you shouldn't have to move to Ohio to be able to get a vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4b2ec5c2f4e0,CC5894978F31,"There is also the point countered Mr. Posner's article, which is that those in party-dominated states will have a feeling their vote doesn't count, and he sais that one vote will not swing an election. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+1ad03cbf143d,CC5894978F31,"Then why do you beleive an upside of the elecoral college is that those in more neutral states will feel their vote counts? Or do those in party-dominated states not matter, since those in neutrals think way more about their votes, and are the only ones you should trust, according to him? In practice, they are the only deciding factor ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6f8401ef42aa,CC5894978F31,"There are also the many unwanted results from electoral colleges, such as the 2000 election's outcome defying the people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3fc6d9db75fd,CC5894978F31,"What Is the Electoral College?"" states you are voting for electors when you vote, but what is the point if they can simply defy you? It would be like if after the president was chosen, the Senate could overule him with a 1/5 vote. There is also the point in Plumer's article about the time Hawaii sent two slates, which forced the desicion to Nixon, who had to validate only the opponet's votes in fear of otherwise receiving bad publicity. There is also the strange way of resolving a tie, which boils down to the same thing as the winner-take-all system, except if more people support  it doesn't matter. It would be like if everybody in the  room wasn't alowed to vote, other than one voted, but everybody in the room agreed anyway for some strange, miraculous reason. (Of course, the one guy in the  next room doesn't agree, and completely takes out your vote, regardless of the fact that there were 30 people in this one.) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+af9a8c52bae6,CC5894978F31,"Now, there is the gregarious amount of contradictory statements that can be found within Mr. Posner's article. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5c4685996e75,CC5894978F31,One has already been mentioned in the winner-take-all system paragraph. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+98d6c61da702,CC5894978F31,"He also conveintly provides a dispute that had nothing to do with a close vote in the Electoral College, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2d3f035ad43c,CC5894978F31,"everything to do with what is wrong with this winner-take-all system, being the 2000 election. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+d0d0dbe268d5,CC5894978F31,"In the same paragraph, me mentions how an Electoral tie is highly unlikely- ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+113be0c3e604,CC5894978F31,as if a tie between the millions of US citizens is. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+66ecda3cc7d0,CC5894978F31,His reason #5 ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7764a5793f86,CC5894978F31,"can be easily solved by simply giving the presidency to the candidate who receives a plurality of votes, rather than a majority. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+a38cc3ac4fee,CC5894978F31,"Reasons number 3 and 4 both contradict reason 2 as well, stating that everybody gets a vote, only swing states should get a vote, and only bigger states should get a vote (even when there is a 51/49 split, where 51%=100%, mind you). ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+600c4305d135,CC5894978F31,"Thus, the Electoral College is completely unfair to voters, and should be abolished. Voters should not have to vote for other votes which could very well defy their's, why not just have the Electoral Cllege do all the voting then? It is both redundant and unfair.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+1988a4155323,CC787397F33B,I along with many other citizens have came to the conclusion that the Electoral College worth keeping. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8f94cf99e986,CC787397F33B,"Though, the process itself has loose ends, overall it benefits the state and national election. The system uses general influence and a representative style of voting that makes the ballot more stable and dependable. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cc3072b456b5,CC787397F33B,"As a start, Electoral College electors are decided upon by the people ",Claim,Effective,,,
+976c5c9da21a,CC787397F33B,This means an elector with similar beliefs to the citizens will be chosen and most likely decide their vote in consideration of popular demand. Each state is given representatives in proportion to the poulation of the state. These people can be anyone who does not work in office and maybe a regular American who is probably going to emathize with the needs of the public and if chosen correctly will stand by the option of the state. Electoral College gives a more concentrated form of voting. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+06731292f0da,CC787397F33B,"In addition, some may argue that the Electoral College is risky and a representative may not always stay true to their word, but isn't this the case with all types of voting? ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b6664a2176b7,CC787397F33B,A presidential candidate makes many a promise during their race for Chief Executive and there is no way to be completely certain that these oaths will hold true. The same goes for the Electoral College. Citizens must have faith in the candidate as they would in the presidential election that they will put their country or state before personal wants and carry out their responsibilities honestly. The Electoral College process requires trust like any other form of election. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+161e738a0d8d,CC787397F33B,"Having a presidential tie could be the messiest turn-out of an election, but with representative voting we can tip the scale in either way, in the interest of any state or party. It's a game of chance, but sure enough works better than flipping a coin! The Electoral College makes the voting system more reliable. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e1d95c46a3c,CC787397F33B,"In conclusion, the Electoral College should be kept as a part of the voting system because it gives a more concentrated form of voting, it only needs the same amount of trust betweencitizen and candidate as every other election style, and overall makes the voting system more reliable. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+382431b5d970,CC96CF4D3854,"There has been a lot of dispute about the electoral college, therefore causing much confusion. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+16ed297ef4ee,CC96CF4D3854,The president should be elected by popular vote only. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6d9e0fc9eef9,CC96CF4D3854,"This allows all voters to be treated equal, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+021aa267a5ad,CC96CF4D3854,avoid untrsutworthhy electors ,Claim,Effective,,,
+67c57cc5009b,CC96CF4D3854,veryone will be given the same amount of knowledge about the campaigns. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d1681a7d6bdf,CC96CF4D3854,The electoral college creates an unfair set up for the voters. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+25cc6ea70512,CC96CF4D3854,"The winner-takes all system gives all the electors to the presidential candidate who won. This system disregards that the opposing candidate received any votes, because all the electors are given to the winner. This doesn't give a chance to the candidates whose party is not necessarily popular in that state. Candidates, therefore spend more time and money campaigning in states they know their party is popular in. According to Bradfor Plumer in 2000, 25 of the largest media markets did not see a campaign ad, because they lived in one of the seventeen states that had no campaigning. Some candiates don't even campaign in some states based on this. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+524e46357997,CC96CF4D3854,"According to an excerpt from
+
+Mother Jones by Bradford Plumer most candidates focus on the ""swing"" states where it is close competiton.  In the case of tie in the electoral vote, the house of reprensentatives vote. This means one  vote represents the whole state. How is that fair for a state like Wyoming that has 500,000 voters? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+68fc26c64791,CC96CF4D3854,Another popular dilema of the electoral college is untrustworthy electors. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+97e06be969e2,CC96CF4D3854,"The electors are chosen in different ways. According to Bradford Palmer in 1960 there was a problemwith the Louisiana legistlature choosing bias electors. Segregationists wanted to be rid the democratic electors and replace them with electors who would not vote for John F. Kennedy. In another case, there has been a history of electors voting for whom they want instead of their party's vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+80fdf431c23e,CC96CF4D3854,"Voters often are not update onall the campaigns due to the unfairness of the electoral vote. There's no doubt that the electoral college is a confusing subject, but this often creates confusion in the ballot box too. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e785d364568e,CC96CF4D3854,"There has been times when voters have casted votes for the wrong candidate. The voters know about the presidential candidate not the elector. States often do not get the same level of campaigning as eachother. According to
+
+Slate Magazine a larger state gets more attention from the presidential candidates than a smaller state does. Over 60 percent of citizens who vote would like a direct election instead of the kind we have now, says Bradford Palmer. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+605c693cbd68,CC96CF4D3854,"The electoral college has caused enough confusion in its lifetime. The United States should change to using only the popular vote to allow all the voters to be created equal, avoid untrustworthy electors, and everyone will be given the same amount of knowledge. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ea10966f1609,CCF1C548FD56,One big thing i want to happen is that the electoral college for voting should be changed for popular vote for the prsident because i think that if you change it voting would go a lot easier than it do now. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5dac088dbd60,CCF1C548FD56,because the electoral college is a more complicated voting matter that people often do and get their votes mixed up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+469c8e8751d6,CCF1C548FD56,it takes more effort and time just to vote rather than a easy popular vote that people can measure off a chart or graph to see with person should get elected. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+595a90200172,CCF1C548FD56,Another thing about the voting process i think i shoul'd talk about is some of the possible problems you can come across after this change in the voting process. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+95877e5029dc,CCF1C548FD56,"here's one thing thats possible of happening is that a lot of people might nor agree with changing the voting process because they dont want to learn a new one because they are so used to the one they already doing. Another one is that poeple might think things would go more worse if someone mad a change because of they way the votes are coming in and if you voting on a behalf of a friend and send the vote to the wrong person and the other person lost by 1 vote when you didn't mean to send that, they should have a computer system that you use that makes sure you really want to vote on that person ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f760ade7da58,CCF1C548FD56,when all these thousands of people vote they votes should actually count not just have people vote and then the only votes that count is the people in some court room that have more business people come in to vote and only there's count ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+00237fb9f803,CCF1C548FD56,"The winner of the election is the most important one because he is the main focu now because his votes were more popular of just alot more than the other person, but thats what i want to talk about. even though the winner won he still have to pay attention to the other candidates but they should have a system that protects the winner files and have people haves a good watch on the people who is elected to see what their background life is like their history and what they do everyday to make sure that person isn't trying no horrible plan for something.    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ae2900ad95e4,CD0C46A0B2E6,In my opinion I believe that students should not do community service for a plethora of ways. ,Position,Effective,,,
+7f075a9901cf,CD0C46A0B2E6,One way i believe that students should not do community service is because they do stuff to help the community in there everyday activities. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+dd0e387bae9e,CD0C46A0B2E6,Students recycle paper and throw away trash. There are many people already doing community service. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+ede6634571dd,CD0C46A0B2E6,For a child it is like punishment to do community service because its taking time out of there own lives to pick up trash. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ce2fa1943ca8,CD0C46A0B2E6,Although some parts of community service is expectable. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b893f2a55aee,CD0C46A0B2E6,"Maybe once a every two months the students could go to a community center and help the homeless, such as feed them and talk to them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f404556673d7,CD0C46A0B2E6,"But it should be in school time since a person only has one life to live, and they better make the best of it. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+cd60a5fbdafa,CD0C46A0B2E6,"It would be fun helping the community with your friends, but not alone. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e214a4cda3e,CD0C46A0B2E6,"Both of the elementary children and my friends are right. It is for a good cause, but it does take time out of what we wish to do. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7d4e3ae0c312,CD33A5B0A307,"we should not abolish the Electoral College, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d251ec35a8a6,CD33A5B0A307,the Electoral College has many benefits when voting for president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d1967501f32,CD33A5B0A307,"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anchorism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a56205ab76b,CD33A5B0A307,"In 2012 the election for president, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to Romneys 51.3. Because most states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, the slightest plurality in a state can cause a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. Though a tie is possible because the total number of votes is 538, it is very unlikely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+31b019877872,CD33A5B0A307,The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0dcd52656c28,CD33A5B0A307,No state has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The voters in toss-up states are more likely to be the thoughtful voters. A large state will recieve more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does. The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast.    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7fb593a6af6c,CD954674E1A6,I believe that schools should allow students to take their phone to school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c4ebf5049617,CD954674E1A6,but should only use them in case of an emergency. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9a0ca09b3b8b,CD954674E1A6,"At lunch or in a free time the students should be talking to their friends that are on the phones contact list or to others who may not have a phone at all and not calling anyone, but their parents, for example if the student broke their ankle then the could call their parents and tell them the situation and not leave them in the dark. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e02881a1c726,CD954674E1A6,"In class students usually use phones even if they are not supposed to and will text the person on the far side of the room.
+
+Some teachers should have the students turn their phone off and put them in a shelf, with a lock so nobody can steal or grab their phone. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7d5150a86728,CD954674E1A6,Some students would disagree with this ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+cb3e78d407b7,CD954674E1A6,"but just telling the students to turn the phone of is not enough, ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ba627a392ebd,CD954674E1A6,"because if the teacher walks out of the room the student can turn it back on and continue texting their friends.
+
+An exception could be if a calculator was gone or disappeared and as long as the don't text they should be allowed to use the phone for educational reasons only. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f5bc4fe1caf,CD954674E1A6,Phones are a major distraction at school and is one of the main reasons students get in trouble some teachers are ok if the phone is in a purse or hidden and actually goes off others not so much. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6b33f08f12fa,CD954674E1A6,If your question is not answered then i will tell you that policy 1 with some changes is the best one. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+88417b3b29bb,CDF2746198CB,"I am writing this letter to you on the topic of the two possible policies you are considering regarding students having cell phones in school. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3ffa1425cd40,CDF2746198CB,"The one that I truly believe would best benefit our school is Policy 2: Not allowing cell phones in school.
+
+This is better than Policy 1 for a number of reasons. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+645dfc31e2ef,CDF2746198CB,"Did you know that 4 out of every 5 eighth graders has a cell phone? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d78f05ecf0b0,CDF2746198CB,"If students were allowed to use their cell phones during free times such a lunch time those without cell phones would feel left out, excluded. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+59e0831154d4,CDF2746198CB,"As a middle school we don't want any students feeling hat way for it could lead to stress and more serious matters.
+
+Those that do have cell phones would make fun of these students and these distractions will likely affect all students grades as they would pay even less attention during class. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76d37c5cf49b,CDF2746198CB,The question you are forced to ask when you deal with this topic is : What is causing these students to feel obliged to text and use their cell phones during class? Well yes they want to communicate with friends in other class and it's also fun to disobey the rules behind the teachers back. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d70f4f5b7d2b,CDF2746198CB,"However, the main reason is due to lack of interest in their academics. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a89f8fc24d15,CDF2746198CB,"More and more teachers are reverting to teaching methods solely based on note taking and book work.
+
+Not only does this bore students to death but it awakens a rebellious nature within them that causes them to use their cell phones.
+
+The method many students want learn with and will learn by is hands on experiments and class discussions.
+
+This way students will feel more important and unique by being able to participate in class.
+
+They will want to learn more and strive to do their best.
+
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ddeea398fbc,CDF2746198CB,"Although Policy 1 is a possible solution to the issue of students using their cell phones and their lack of attention during class it's just not a viable one. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+70e5953b37fc,CDF2746198CB,"Allowing them to use their cell phones during lunch and free time will have the opposite affect of what is meant of Policy 1. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9ccd5df29663,CDF2746198CB,"Although students may continue to feel the urge to use cell phones during class after you enforce policy 2, their view on the matter will change after teaching methods are made better.
+
+Not only will this solve the problem but it will boost student moral and grades. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b3eb0d742e02,CDF6072AB1D6,How many movies have you seen that depict the future with advanced technology such as holograms or even driveless cars? How much of a reality could that be? The case of driveless cars has been something that has been going on for awhile. Even around 2009 Google came out with their first almost driveless car. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+4ec6a1e669b6,CDF6072AB1D6,"lthough driveless cars are depicted as futuristic and magical, really driveless cars seem like more of an endangerment ",Position,Adequate,,,
+20683df5fb67,CDF6072AB1D6,"to our economy, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b694ed539456,CDF6072AB1D6,our safety ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8a670b30a738,CDF6072AB1D6,our time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+14280ea51c1a,CDF6072AB1D6,"To begin, the manufacturing of driveless cars is insanely expensive. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6b0917c8bb4e,CDF6072AB1D6,Where would all this money even come from? We would have to fund it to provide research for a car that doesn't know how to back out of a driveway yet. There has already been 200 million dollars spent on radar a device on a hiltop. So why waste money on something that only goes up to 25 mph and won't even drive if you don't have your hands on the wheel? It seems like driveless really just means assissting. But assissting to who? Obviously not the wallets of the buyers. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a954a085bd7,CDF6072AB1D6,"Secondly, the driveless cars are supposed to help for the better of the people, they say it would be ""safer"" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f68babb2cda6,CDF6072AB1D6,But where is the proof that it is safer? ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+75534a56fde8,CDF6072AB1D6,"Many states have already banned the use of any self-autonomous cars, just leaving out four states who have left them limited use to test out the cars. How can the world just expect for these cars to be safe when we already have superstition over these cars and those who don't will barely let them use the cars too? They also suggest since the driver will probably be bored that they should put in some entertainment in the car. But what happens when, the car stops and has the driver do what they're supposed to, but they aren't prepared because they were entertained by something else? It's unsafe to assume that having all these distracting things around people who are supposed to be driving won't effect how they do in a sudden situation. There is also the hastle of having to reconstruct the roads, which goes back to the point of money and also safety. It is never safe when there is construction going around, especially when they have to reconstruct the whole road in order to make the driveless cars work. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+77762878d702,CDF6072AB1D6,"Time is very limited in this day and age. We barely have time to do anything, we have so many errands to run, so many things to do, but it's like we never have enough time. If the expansion of driveless cars would continue we would have to reconstruct the roads, delaying many people with getting to work or going to school, or just everyday things. Then we have to go to the government too, to repeal the ban put over on many states. So, naturally, that will take forever too, because when does the government ever get such controversial things solved super quick? Why waste the time of millions for something we aren't sure of yet? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7b2f70b1321b,CDF6072AB1D6,"All in all, the manufacturing of driveless cars is pointless when the car isn't even really driveless. It seems more of a hazard to the economy, the safety of many, and the time of others than it does as an ensuring safe way to get around. In the case of the driveless car, the driveless car lost. There are too many negative effects for it to ever succeed.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5121e1380a16,CE3B81539AE0,I was recently was informed that the electrol collge system is going under. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f7ec8e8bcfe6,CE3B81539AE0,It helps use with our votes. If we lose it certain American citizens votes will not be counted in for the president election ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bb99d42aab67,CE3B81539AE0,I believe that we American citizens should be able to vote. Our votes should all matter. We as a nation are one. One vote we all should be able to vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9bb72136ba62,CE3B81539AE0,"To begin with,
+
+We hold our next presidnet in our hands. Thats why we should change the election by popular votes ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+774fd6e1d645,CE3B81539AE0,If everybody over the age of 21 votes all of our votes would be counted in and we would pick our president ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2be285cd0c77,CE3B81539AE0,We should also keep the electrol college so congress helps our nation to vote also ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a18de4cc7d33,CE3B81539AE0,"Because if we give this country over to the wrong president our country could fall and we could go under. One of the reasons that our country is still standing today is because we as a nation have pick a great president, without hessition. Back in the old days we didnt have a right to vote. We are blessed to be able to vote and a system like the electrol college today. If we lose the electrol college we lose hope and faith that our country we be still standing. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+25542f089e42,CE3B81539AE0,"In conclusion,
+
+We americans are sometimes not greatful for the things we have but without we are lost. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+33d6bbba823c,CE64FA08E4CF,I think students should be required to perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1cc435708a42,CE64FA08E4CF,So we can make this world better by cleaning up litter. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+774643f8f508,CE64FA08E4CF,The most important is teaching kids how to learn. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3879449e39c,CE64FA08E4CF,helping them do better in class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e574451bcff,CE64FA08E4CF,We can make students become smarter. Teach them what they need to know. Teach them from wrong to good. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f8a213ef2a0,CE64FA08E4CF,They need the education that they are giving. To actually become something in the world. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9929c1bf9d6f,CE64FA08E4CF,LITTERING! Is everywhere. Papers are on the ground. They throw there trash on the ground like if someone is going to pick it up. So is good that community service make them pick up trash. So they can keep the ground clean. So those who think its important it is. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1610315a7b19,CE64FA08E4CF,Some people don't have respect for the world they live in. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66a5921d35ea,CE64FA08E4CF,Those who think is bad i guess they like living in a dirty place. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b016b3fdfc89,CE64FA08E4CF,But that is a great way to help world. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5e04c6b7e091,CE64FA08E4CF,Helping people clean up the streets. Sidewalks that people walk on. Doing the best for are community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2245424f65fa,CE64FA08E4CF,So i will like to help do my community service. THANK YOU!! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bb4a7f83c3bc,CEF86741E2C5,"The Electoral college has been around for a long time but, do we really need it? Is it your votes that affecting your next president. Under the electoral college it is not. The electoral college says that voters do no vote for the president but for a slate of the electors, which elect the presidents ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+12a679c85744,CEF86741E2C5,We need to kept the voting process we have now ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b74d4510af39,CEF86741E2C5,so that way we don't arguments throughout the states. In the electoral college yoor vote is sent to someone not holding public office. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+61484ce0fa25,CEF86741E2C5,"When you vote you are getting a slate of the vote and to feel that their vote does not matter, that the new president will have no regard for their interest,is he really your president. The way we vote today is not that best we can do in some ways. I think that we need to have all the voters votes count towards the president that they want. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5701d2ab3be1,CEF86741E2C5,"We should let the people vote for who they want and not for someone else to vote for you. The constituiton says ""We the people, By the people,For the people."" So we should vote for who we want to represent us. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8aaec2c9d809,CEF86741E2C5,The electoral college is based of a winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b3cd13e0e19,CEF86741E2C5,Another factor that is wrong with the electoral college is that bigger states like Californa get more votes than Columbia ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2d50762c1726,CEF86741E2C5,"So for example, say that Californa gets 45 electoral votes and then Columbia has the same amount of voters vote for the president they want they will only gte about 5 to 8 because of the state size. Once again restating that we need to vote for we want to and have everyone's vote coung not just the votes added up and then shrunk to electoral votes ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e659ec1e89ed,CEF86741E2C5,The electoral college does have some help in some ways like in a run-off election. The electoral college help control that and produces a clear winner. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b06f4ffa8d0b,CEF86741E2C5,"The elecoral college does some advantages too, but it still has disadvantges. The electoral college is  the president wins by popular vote. The electoral college has a total of 538 electors but, ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+689898a088f9,CEF86741E2C5,sometimes the electors don't always listen to their voters and vote for who they want not who the state wants. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8046ad9207ea,CEF86741E2C5,"The president has their own group of electors which have been chosen by the canidate's political party, but certain state lwas vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. The election is every four years on the first Tuesday of November, which gives you time to think who you want to be the next president and cast a vote ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+518c86c606b4,CEF86741E2C5,but with the electoral college your vote could not really count. Have knowing that your vote may not count will make you upset and rethink about voting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e9d73c9be553,CEF86741E2C5,"In conclusion, the eletoral college has some good things that does help us but, it has bad things too that make is sadband angry. We decide who we want to run our country but, e need to think about how the voting process really works. I am only one person but, one person can make a difference. So just remeber on thing 'We the people, By the people, For the people.""   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+57d443a40563,CF0AA3E3DF6D,My position on diverles cars is that im all for it ,Position,Adequate,,,
+35cb4b05409d,CF0AA3E3DF6D,They seem like a very cool and interresting thing to have. Some cars can drive up to half a million miles without a crash. They also can alert people to take over when puing out of drive ways or dealing with traffic issues. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+62c32953a11d,CF0AA3E3DF6D,The diverles cars also give us time to do things ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b1e8eedac7c,CF0AA3E3DF6D,They give us time to do our makeup or call someone. If you did that before you whould get ina car crash. The car basicly detects everything in its way. The car whouldnt always be driving its self u whould need to come in once in awhile. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+303080c9a59c,CF0AA3E3DF6D,"They have many companies who are making driverles cars. The companies beleive that its not the smart car .They belive the roads need to be smarter in general. The roads chould give the car signals from the front of the car. The car read positive and negitive polarity as messages in binary code .They thought the roads wernt going to work but they did. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+94d5033aba6d,CF0AA3E3DF6D,hey concluded that these smart cars chould work really wel for peole one day. The only thing is that u whould have to watch the road just to make sure everything is going okay. Without the idea of smart roads you whouldnt have smart cars .The cars basicly are smart cars because of the smart roads. The car has many senors in and outside oif the car to help it drive by its self ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+350c09c5578e,CF0AA3E3DF6D,The car also lets you know if there are any problems or if it needs help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b906e5db7ef,CF43485AE351,"Visualize this: a student has been suffering for months on end from depression. Every day, he is hesitant to attend school, as he knows the stressful environment exacerbates the symptoms of his depression. When he speaks to his principal about taking time off from school, his principal presents an even better solution: taking classes from home. As soon as the student begins his classes online, he notices a shift in his mental health. He actually enjoys learning. This is only one example of the benefits classes online could present ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d9bd29f7476d,CF43485AE351,"There is actually a myriad of benefits for students that results from them attending classes from home, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+67c845acad23,CF43485AE351,including aiding students in maintaining their health ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ccf1b6b2825b,CF43485AE351,more exclusive teaching that is comfortable for all ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d532aa8c6573,CF43485AE351,and providing a way for students to learn while giving them time to attain their goals. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+681f3882d70a,CF43485AE351,"This method of learning may be more helpful now than ever. At a time where such a great epidemic -the Coronavirus- is present, students risk spreading the disease when they are compelled to go to school despite being ill. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8963f3a1db47,CF43485AE351,"However, there is no way for them to remain home and keep up with schoolwork. This fear of being unable to attend school and still keeping up with their course load is one that plagues many students. Personally speaking, I can reference numerous students who have felt dangerously ill on school days, but were so afraid of missing tests and presentations that they still came. They felt that if they even missed one day, they would have missed salient lessons, causing their work to pile up, resulting in stress. Providing an alternate method for these students to learn, such as online classes, would have mitigated their concerns. This logic pertains to mental health as well. It is common knowledge that the mental health of adolescents in this generation is declining, and the most prominent reason is school. Online classes provide an avenue for students who feel their mental health is worsening to still receive an education but from a place of comfort, which is their home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88dde6b782d4,CF43485AE351,"
+Additionally, simply put, some students may just learn better in an online environment. Attending a school with thousands of students is not necessarily the most desirable environment for every student, not every day. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+abb786eb2947,CF43485AE351,"Students are forced to learn in classrooms with another 20-30 students. Some students have trouble concentrating with so many of their peers present. There will be less people at a time in online classes, so they can learn better and acquire a better grasp on concepts, as there are less distracting factors. The primary benefit, however, is for students with social anxiety, those who feel intimidated by the presence of others, which is more common than one might think. Those who say social anxiety can be reduced by being around large quantities of people at a time do not understand the mechanisms of anxiety. Sometimes time is the best remedy; being forced to indulge in conversation with their peers will only be an obstacle to students with anxiety-related issues. This obstruction is eliminated in distance learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4fcc0734807c,CF43485AE351,"Furthermore, though the specific details of online school have not been listed, such as the duration of classes, it can be assumed that class length will be dependent upon the student. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b68556a88190,CF43485AE351,"For example, if a student's schedule is comprised of Algebra II, Biology, US History, and English Language and Composition, if the student is strong in math, he or she will likely speed through the course, allotting more time to the other subjects. If the online classes are based upon pace, students can get through subjects quicker, rather than being forced to remain in a class for an hour and a half. This results in students having more time to engage in the activities they are passionate about while having more flexible schedules. Why is this significant? Well, for example, places like INOVA have volunteer programs for kids to help senior citizens that require people to work from 12 pm-3 pm on weekdays. A regular student could not possibly participate in that program, regardless of how passionate he or she is about helping the elderly. Alternatively, if a student had an idea for a groundbreaking research project that he or she must complete in a lab, the student could devote more time to developing their procedure and collecting data than before. Attending school in person, regularly, will likely be an obstacle for these students, as a nearly 8 hour long school day with four hours of homework and mandatory extracurriculars does not leave sufficient time for the students to pursue their dreams ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c357a47f1f4,CF43485AE351,"Now, some may argue that the subset of students previously mentioned is not representative of the majority of students, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+72ef1044b27b,CF43485AE351,"but that is information we will likely never know, as they are not permitted the time necessary to explore their interests. Perhaps there are many students with innovative ideas for research projects that lack the time for it. With the addition of online school, students might be able to devote more time to discovering their interests and pursuing them. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+933a816d0fff,CF43485AE351,"Although there may be debate about the ways in which online school can be taken advantage of, people should learn to focus on the best in children and the online system, not their potential and minuscule disadvantages. Permitting students to attend classes from home has a variety of advantages. Among those, the most evident ones are that students can focus more of their time on their passions, learn better, and preserve their health without concern of missing class. Schools are meant to be a place where students can grow by obtaining knowledge and applying it. Whether classes are online or in-person should not matter greatly (though online may actually be more helpful), as the outcome of an education will remain the same. Thus, experiencing learning via video conferencing and online resources is a solution to both improve the quality of education and the well being of students in the long-term.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+38fdac677dbc,CF84C9D788A9,"It has come to my attention that many students are involved in work such as, sports, academics, and more primarily community service. As a common student of this establishment I think to myself whether it is right or wrong to do community service. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d9185e5b2b40,CF84C9D788A9,"In my opinion, community service is like a thank-you to our environment, neighbors, and government, especially in such a hard economic time. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3808ca5f513c,CF84C9D788A9,"Though, as I look at my peers they think community service is something like a ""scandal"", which influences others, such as myself to not go on with these deeds ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+dcdc616c4011,CF84C9D788A9,"Why is the world like this? I know it is simply not because community service is bad. I know for sure that is wrong, or is it because people today are too lazy? Or simply scared of criticism? Yet, we as people must give back to our community, not act as if it were to be a burden. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+21dc399b6d3d,CF84C9D788A9,"Yes, I know times like these are dreadfully hard, with taxes, jobs, and money. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5915f3e3bebd,CF84C9D788A9,"What if everyday we woke up with a good feeling, a feeling of empathy for others, our lives, and especially our own community within this fine country? We as the children or America must stand up, ignore criticism and judgement and just do the right thing. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2deef472e01a,CF84C9D788A9,"As I strongly write this letter, I must ask these questions. Do you think it is necessary to do community service? Do you think it is needed to give back to our communities and just say thank-you? Do you think it is the right thing to do, to love and be proud of our freedom? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2453af90a40e,CF84C9D788A9,"This is what I think of community service, and outstanding way of showing our gratitude to our communities. Please think about this and ask yourself this. Do you give back to your community? And if so, please strongly consider to make it a rule for us students to do community service. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+13e556a72ef2,CFA59480F8C5,"One method of chosing a President is having an electoral college here in the U.S.A.  That means, the people vote for a group of electors. Not the candidate running for President. In that group they count in the votes and elect witch candidate would win. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+29bebdf2365b,CFA59480F8C5,There are many people that do no agree with this method. One should be able to put in there vote straight to who wins at an election not send it off to a group of people that one does not know. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e3dbc6b8259a,CFA59480F8C5,"It's part of the list of rights the people should have. Any one can be a elector. In the past, an elector has change there candiate. so instead of who a person's vote going to who they voted for... it would go to the other candidate. Not everything hat should be right in this world is. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1daba879dea,CFA59480F8C5,"The ""winner-takes-all"" system is when all electors are awarded to the winning presidential candidate. This helps when it comes down to what is fair and what isn't. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+04f2e492e133,CFA59480F8C5,"When Obama got 61.7 percent and Romney only had 51.3 most electoral votes were on the ""winner-takes-all"" basis. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d7eb64f426dc,CFA59480F8C5,"Yes, it's true. Not all state has the same number of electoral votes. But that is just because not every state has the same population as one and other. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+83cfab332101,CFA59480F8C5,"If every state got the same amount of electoral votes, them it wouldn't be fair. North Carolina doesn't have the same populations as Texas. it wouldn't make sence to give them both just 3 or both 38. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3e79c04ec3ca,CFA59480F8C5,One should vote for themselfs on who should run our country. An electoal college is not needed anymore. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1406e6e6d522,CFCB9135F1BF,"I am sorry to announce that the unfairness of the Electoral College to the Americna people, has come to my attention. As a fifteen year old highschool student, I will not have to worry about voting for quite some time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4b0a86ac565f,CFCB9135F1BF,"However, if the Electoral College continues to be the nation's way of electing a leader, I'm not so sure I will even have the desire to vote when the time comes. ",Position,Effective,,,
+d828b00f7b2b,CFCB9135F1BF,"When a voter votes for the president, the Electoral College makes it so they are actually voting for an elector, or someone who is supposed to vote for the candidate chosen. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+afe5a89dc325,CFCB9135F1BF,"most states have a sort of ""winner-take-all"" system in which all electorals go to the winning candidate of that state. Electors can be anyone, according to
+
+The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer. How Electors are chosen depends entirely of the state! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c7fa0287697b,CFCB9135F1BF,"In civics class, students are taught the difference between popular vote and electoral vote. However, seventh grader do not learn the entirety of it, seeing as learning about the Electoral College may affect how they see the country they live in. Popular vote, to my understanding, is the number of votes a candidate recieves from the American people . Electoral vote, the thing that determines who becomes president, is done by the Electors determined when voters chose which candidate they wanted to win. Electoral vote, and popular vote are not the same thing, for instance one could win the popular vote, yet lose the electoral vote. Why is this? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e2e527e9820e,CFCB9135F1BF,"Well, one can not promise that an elector, will vote for the same candidate that the American people have already chosen. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e3d43e3729eb,CFCB9135F1BF,"because of this system, candidates tend to visit only the ""swing"" states, instead of trying to win over the majority of the country, they focus only on the states which change periodically from red to blue! ",Claim,Effective,,,
+e5f9a44cd8cc,CFCB9135F1BF,"In the case of a tie, the election is thrown into the House of Representatives, where they then vote on the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a1bb1451b903,CFCB9135F1BF,"Let me explain why this is unfair, each state only casts one vote, so a delegate from Wyoming reprents the vote of 500,000 while a delegate from  California is supposed to represent 35 million! there is no possible way for one person to be able to speak for 500,000+, everyone has their own opinion. Everyone belongs to a political party; not everyone belongs to the same party. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+106632c986c3,CFCB9135F1BF,"One may argue that the Electoral College is a good thing and must stay for the benefit of the American people. With large states such as Texas and California, swing states, run-off elections, and certainty of outcome, they have a valid point ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+02500509e82a,CFCB9135F1BF,"Of course everyone has a valid opinion, but they would be wrong. The Electoral College is the easy way to decide who will lead the country, not the best way. Today's technology can ensure a more fair way to decide the fate of the nation ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+8b78d8703ec1,CFCB9135F1BF,"I prepose that popular vote be the only way to vote for president. With technological advances, machines can sort throught all the votes and determine who won. This way, the American people can rest assured knowing their vote wasn't thrown away because an Elector voted for the opposing candidate. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5a8609f4776b,D01060C5AE7D,Students would definitely benefit from attending online classes ,Position,Adequate,,,
+19fab57d98ca,D01060C5AE7D,"For most students, school is known to be a stressful learning environment. This makes it harder for students to learn and feel comfortable in what they're learning ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2386e2c3cf27,D01060C5AE7D,"If students had online classes, they would have more freedom in their learning ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d2a51c7665ea,D01060C5AE7D,"Also, students would feel comfortable and have less stress. Attending classes online would make students have a desire to learn more. Students would not only benefit from online learning, but they would also enjoy online classes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3357ee092bb,D01060C5AE7D,"First and foremost, students would benefit from online classes because they would more freedom in their learning ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45cf773f9666,D01060C5AE7D,"When students are at school, they tend to have a schedule and they're told exactly what to do and when to do it. From personal experience, I've learned that most students don't enjoy being forced to do something. Being told what to do and when to do it, makes the learning environment more stressful for students. Therefore, the more freedom students have the less stress they'll receive. At school, students have some unreasonable consequences. If students did online learning, they would benefit from not having as many consequences. Student would benefit from having less consequences. Therefore, students should have the right to their freedom, especially when it comes to what they're learning. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c677027fdec9,D01060C5AE7D,"Also, students would feel more comfortable and enjoy online classes ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d2706431bfa,D01060C5AE7D,"The average student, plays sports or does extracurricular activities, making their schedule more difficult. Online school would provide students with a more flexible schedule. Students would also be able to do and try new things outside of the classroom. Activities keep students engaged, making them want to learn. This also makes learning more fun and helps students further their learning. The less stress students have the more successful they'll be. Students can't have fun with what they're learning if they're stressed. Having a lot of stressful causes students to not do well in school. For some students, stress can be helpful, but for the average high school student stress isn't beneficial and cause more issues for students. Students should be able to have fun and enjoy their learning for their benefit. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0bad2215e616,D01060C5AE7D,Others may say online school isn't beneficial ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+1522c1513d32,D01060C5AE7D,but students are going to pay more attention and have less stress ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d3b5cc765641,D01060C5AE7D,"Students already don't enjoy the idea of coming to school everyday, and being told what to do and how to act. Some of the rules at school can be unreasonable for students causing students to get into more trouble. Online classes would take away that trouble. Therefore, making students want to learn and do better. If students were more comfortable in their learning environment, they would be more encouraged to learn. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d53e0e82e46,D01060C5AE7D,"Finally, students are constantly stressed everyday from school. Making it difficult for students to enjoy what they're learning causing them to slack off. If students felt more comfortable in their learning environment, they would be more successful. Every parent and teacher should want to see their student succeed. Online school sounds like the perfect plan for students. Every student should be able to enjoy what they're learning. In conclusion, online classes can beneficial to students causing them to have a more successful future.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fd52cae9e7cd,D0187B1F88F7,I have written this letter to you to illistatrate how i disagree this situation with the electoral college ,Position,Adequate,,,
+07eafa281495,D0187B1F88F7,I think you are still giving the president to much power still ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2ca4ed88b7ba,D0187B1F88F7,By this i mean we should have the right as people i which ever stateto vote for our electors. Having the pesident choose for us although we choose the president to represent us on the first place ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f9de0c05245e,D0187B1F88F7,then theres also the situation that we can vote for our elector but we may often get confused and rhem choos e the wrong one ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3540dd55476c,D0187B1F88F7,The biggest statement against this so far would be something that we may all know by its name (The Disaster Factor) ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3331fb6d2f41,D0187B1F88F7,"What? you've never heard of it well let me help you. To start you of you shoould consider yourself lucky it was the biggest election crisis in a century. The worst thing that frightens me is just knowing that even though the legislatur is responsible for picking the electors, the electors have the choice to defy us the as the people ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e40a8e9047e9,D0187B1F88F7,"If you think thats the worst honey you should know thats not even half of it,theres also how its unfair to voters because of its winner-take-all system ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4a9920a381f,D0187B1F88F7,This system states that in each state candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ef5152dd6ab,D0187B1F88F7,IN conclusion keeping the electoral college will be unfair and unjust to us people. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d5d0ef1c2c5,D040AD700709,changing  it from Electroral college to popular is grate idea . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c28f780ca7c5,D040AD700709,it be easay to tell wtich state voted for the president the most also  you don't  have to recount the votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee95d8c7a6ed,D040AD700709,the problem with electoral college is that voters dont vote for the president  but a slate of the electors who in turn elect the president . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7ee449a7a02,D040AD700709,the electoral  vote caused the 2000 fiasco it was the biggest Election crisis  in a deacades  where  they had to recounnt the stat votes and electors  the system failed to keep count of the votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c30d2b9f0121,D040AD700709,the electors  college is unfair to voters .because of the winner take all system in each state candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chances of winning . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de27bea688b2,D040AD700709,seventeen states didn't see  the candidates  at all they didn't even get chance to see a single ad about them . ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87a3d6e9242e,D040AD700709,to top it all off changing from electoral to popualr is less hassel and less choas for the people and santes .    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dbc55fe42d3b,D0432DB2D3A3,In my opinion i think we should change voting to popular vote. The reason why is because the governmennt sometimes performs certain actions that they think is good for the people when at the end of it its really not its just for the government to get more money. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+85e48abf643b,D0432DB2D3A3,So when it comes to the president of the United States of America I think we should change it to popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c5bc8333137d,D0432DB2D3A3,Because the electoral college might mess up dicisions and its a really bad thing to mess up the dicision of who is the president of our country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+355985d06b40,D0432DB2D3A3,In the past we have had many bad presidents bacause of mess ups in electoral colleges or uneven amounts of electoral voters. Also bradford plumer staes that in last election 60% of voters prefered a direct election and not an electoral college vote. Also votes would be settled much easier because there would a one in a million chance of getting votes tied and the people would have it there way. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81f40408a629,D0432DB2D3A3,"If we were to keep the electoral college there will countinue to have untrustworthy presidents or irisponsible presidents like obama,george bush jr, or ronald reagen. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1f8362876369,D0432DB2D3A3,The downside to having popular vote would be that if a candidate were to convice the American people to follow his commands like Adolf Hitler did and lead them blindly then that would be a major problem. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6ef6a9414a21,D0432DB2D3A3,But the constitution has rights and amendments that doesnt allow for those types of incidents to occur. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+129e9026495b,D0432DB2D3A3,Therefore those are my reasons for wanting to change the system of electoral voting to be changed to popular voteing. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+58b97d109c56,D06FFBFCBCE5,I think we should change the voting method we have now to popular vote because everyone would have a say in getting the right person to become our most important man. ,Position,Effective,,,
+cbc95010fd21,D06FFBFCBCE5,Many people would be very happy to vote who they want then hoping other people vote the same person as they do to get a electoral vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cad793a18963,D06FFBFCBCE5,Many people in political carrers question why not many people vote in the United States Of America. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ae4d09797e12,D06FFBFCBCE5,Maybe some people dont vote because of this topic maybe they hate they way the votes get counted ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0560c761eb65,D06FFBFCBCE5,i agree people shouldnt have to count on other people to there vote to the president they want. I think its a great idea for states having everyone vote and the marjority goes to that president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5ee7e047cd1f,D06FFBFCBCE5,"An electoral college is consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The electoral college requires a presidential canidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c5bbcce0707a,D06FFBFCBCE5,Presidents count on mostly big states to vote for them. People in the big states like califorina should be able to choose based on marjority of the votes. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+48e3da5b8df9,D06FFBFCBCE5,"Elections are held on Tuesday after the first Monday of November. The way voting is held is when you vote your acutally ""help"" chose your states electors other then choosing then person that you want. Also voting for canidates electors to choose them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a32f7cf93eba,D06FFBFCBCE5,The electoral college is unfair very outdated and irrational. Many people today preferr that the congress changes they way voting is held other then hoping people vote for the same people you want to be president (Quote) Abloish the electoral college! ~ Bob Dole.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e2c91b254d9f,D0B2235710B6,I do not have a drives license nor do I have a learners permit. If I did have any of the two I would be against the fact about a self driving car. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e8769e8b106a,D0B2235710B6,it prohibits new learners from driving the correct way. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ad1b3881c7c5,D0B2235710B6,It may be very expensive to purchase this kind of technology. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f097463cc46,D0B2235710B6,I am also uncomfortable with the car having cameras everywhere including inside of it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff61be2b5736,D0B2235710B6,It might make the driver feel strange knowing that they are being watched and the car is invading their privacy. Another reason why I do not like it is hackers could hack the system and cause someone to crash into something and cause the passengers to get seriously injured. Also their could be a time where the car malfuntions and crashes. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+23eae8bff23f,D0B2235710B6,I think that if this driverless car idea does not work out he way that Google planned it to be then they would lose lots of money. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf8f2b7163ab,D0B2235710B6,People all over the world may or may not like considering the fact that it is new to the world and it is not normal to have someting drive for them. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d743e5a6bdc4,D0B2235710B6,I think that this self-driving car is a bad idea becuas it myay be dangerous to people all over the world. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4958535e0958,D0B46299D094,This goes out to the senator of florida. I think we need to chang to voteing way. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f582e9a12032,D0B46299D094,We need to change it from the Electoral college to the most popular vote for the president of th Unitd States of America. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0d30cb17e367,D0B46299D094,"Because whats the point of all of our parents and alot of other adults of voting if we can't even get what we want but no it's all up to the electors and congress, ect. like for real what is the point in voting if it isn't a fair shot. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c93e84653661,D0B46299D094,Now that I've read it we don't even vote for the prsident we vote for the slate of electorswho in turn elect the president. Whom are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? It depnds on the state sometimes state conventions sometimes the stateparty's centeral committee sometimes the presidential candidates themselves. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8ce2ca623d67,D0B46299D094,Can voters control whom their electors vote for ? Not always. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25cab4810fb4,D0B46299D094,Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate? Sometimes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0eeb4efdd253,D0B46299D094,At the most basic level the electoral college is unfair to voters. And dont likethat because the what the heck is happening if were not acktually voting for the president and just the electors. Like for real then whats the point of voting if were not getting what we want. When the goverment is all about giveing the people what they want. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+00697b9422e6,D0DF7AB8B493,Dear senator Im arguing in favor of keeping the Electoral collage. It has come to my attencion that people want to change it to election by popular vote for the president of U.S. I think that we should keep the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+487faaae2ef2,D0DF7AB8B493,because it makes more sense and is easier for you guys to count the votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa2d10268375,D0DF7AB8B493,"It is more orginized by level of the voting people lie president, vice president ect ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+802345003763,D0DF7AB8B493,"The Electoral vote consists of 538 electors. The most votes that are needed for being elected for president are 270 votes. Each candidate running for president has his own group of electors. The are generally chisen by the candidate political party so is fare. So Im sure that you are going to consider this and read it because some people dont thhink about it. Some dont know how it works and vote for a new one because it sound better but is not.
+
+I just want to make sure people are inform with. That they read this and tthink about it. This is only held every 4 years on the tuesday after the first monday of november. So you might not want to make a big mistake making this decision. People might think that this is not that big of a deal but it is. This very important for the president and the government. This only happens Every 4 year so you got to wait a long time. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b5730f9d5d1b,D0DF7AB8B493,I am very imform about this and making a change will only make thinks worse. People are not going to get use to doing another way or they are gonna get confuse with the old one. It going to be a caus if you change it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+291638bd6e8c,D110D1D93270,"Driverless cars are a relatively new concept in the automobile industry, and the benefits they offer could potentially decrease the risk in driving, especially given the inconsistencecy of drivers in today's world. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a2762f5365c9,D110D1D93270,"While this is a tempting and seemingly perfect solution to reducing the number of car accidents, I do not support the idea of driverless cars. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b32914169c5f,D110D1D93270,"The author states in section four that, ""The combination of all of this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel"". While humans are not in any way perfect drivers, the natural instincts and reactions of a human behind the wheel are impossible to capture in the form of sensors, robots, or mechanincs of any kind. In situations where unorthodox solutions are needed to remain in control of the car and keep from crashing, veteran drivers have the knowledge and experience to do so. Robots may have programs to react in certain situations, or to move out of the way if an object is coming towards the car at a rapid speed, but not all situations can be programmed. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+244c29da4dca,D110D1D93270,"Robots simply cannot react the same ways humans do, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0d49a9bccc62,D110D1D93270,"Section eight of the passage focuses on the psychological aspects of driverless cars, and introduces thd idea of laziness and boredom in human nature. Later on, the author states that some manufacturers hope to address this problem by including entertainment in the cars to remedy this boredom. Bringing in car entertainment wuld only further distract the now obsolete human drivers from the road, which in the case of an emergency, could prove fatal to not only the driver, but the passengers in the car as well. The Google car mentioned in section 7 ""Announces when the driver should be prepared to take over"". If the human did not hear the car announce this, and the car was reverted to the drivers control, the driver might end up in a crash. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+141d6cbc9ffc,D110D1D93270,"If the driverless cars provide more distractions than are at hand in the world today, no matter if a human is driving or not, the human driving the car could end up dead along with the passengers of the car. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0f910b73dfae,D110D1D93270,"If driverless cars do become a reality, human drivers may one day become obsolete. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+608d2ccb0768,D110D1D93270,"Today's world is focused heavily on transportation and getting from one point to the next. Driverless cars would fufil this requirement, but without the help of human drivers. The more that driverless cars would develop and improve, the less and less amount of humans would know how to drive. While this does not seem like a major problem if driverless cars were a reality, but the malfunctioning of systems would prove to be chaotic. If there was a systemwide problem with driverless cars, all of the vehicles in use, malfuctioning or not, would have to be recalled and fixed, causing mass hysteria. Because of the loss of driving skills, nobody would know how to drive. Humans would be unable to travel places, go to work, or do recreational activities. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b4a7edc9de07,D110D1D93270,"Driverless cars may promote many benefits to humans seeking leisure and comfort while driving, but driverless cars could prove to create some very serious safety issues, especially on the busy roads of today's society. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3d18632c2f3d,D1183F23D2A6,"The Electoral College is stupid and we should not use it.  I have many reasons to believe that this is an unfair system that is adulterating our country's wonderful ways. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+4ced11473756,D1183F23D2A6,The first reason for why I despise this system is because we have had people with more than half of the country voting for them not be elected President. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0ae54667d4fe,D1183F23D2A6,"This is due to winning by just enough in certain states that you get their elector votes.  If you win by 51% in a state with 4 electoral votes, but someone else wins by 99% in a state with 3 electoral votes, you will have more electoral votes, but less popular votes.  In the system that we are set up with, electoral votes is how you will get elected for President.  This happened during the Presidental Election in 2000, when Gore won the popular vote, but Busch won the electoral votes and was elected President.  It also happened several times before, most recently in 1888. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ed0ba04bce01,D1183F23D2A6,With the Electoral College it is more likely that a tie will happen.  ,Claim,Effective,,,
+522633a52174,D1183F23D2A6,"This is beacuse there are only 538 electoral votes, which is a lot less than 300 million popular votes, for every U.S. citizen.  If there is a tie, then the Senate and House of Representatives has to do all this stupid stuff to figure out who wins. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+079954ddf275,D1183F23D2A6,"In the process of the Electoral College, the voters in the smaller states are given more power than those in the larger states. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bc50ff193a9c,D1183F23D2A6,"Every state gets a minimum of 3 electoral votes, and then more are added depeding on the size of the state's population.  WIth 3 votes for a population of 500,000, Wyoming has more votes per citizen than the larger states do.  Large states with ten of millions of people may have only a few more votes than Wyoming does, giving it's individual citizens more power in choosing the President. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1341e47466ee,D1183F23D2A6,"Because of the Electoral College, Presidential Canidates spend a large portion of their time in ""Swing States,"" like Ohio or Florida, and little or no time to states with predictable outcomes. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+57330ee119f8,D1183F23D2A6,"A swing state is a state that could go either way in the election, so the canidates spend a lot of time convincing it's populants to vote for them, because of the winner-takes-all method.  This is unfair to the states with predicted outcomes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a9f142eb63f5,D1183F23D2A6,"In conclusion, the Electoral College is old, useless, irrational, and hurtful to our country.  This is why we should abolish it.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bccd608d39f2,D1200B924E51,As a student learning more and more about the world we live in I understand that there has been problems deciding weather or not congress should continue to use the electoral college the elect our nationals new or future presidents. I believe that the race for presidency in just a huge game and the electoral college is just a great tool that is used in this game to find a faster way to win. But some people probably don't even know how to use it which is why the problem was arroused. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4f300db4661c,D1200B924E51,Taking aways the electoral college is like playing a game that have no obsticles nor opponents to challege you ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9549ca3fed4c,D1200B924E51,Nothing in life is fare or cheep and by only using popular votes is to cheat the candidates of the true experience of running for what they want. If you or me were to run for president I'm sure we would want to have the oppertunity to use the electoral college to our advantage. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e7609d38bf8a,D1200B924E51,I believe the electoral chollege should continue to be used and nothing hsould change about how our stong nation selects our leaders because with change comes new obsticals and with those leeps and jumps comes errors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec9d3a170ebc,D1200B924E51,To change the way something has been done for such a long time would be like asking to distroy something and rebiuld it all the way back from the begining. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ec149d03ce5d,D1200B924E51,"I think that as a nation these problems are nothing to us, Why creat a big problem out of a simpler problem when we can just let it be and work our way arround the problems we face together. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+51a92c2494ad,D145F56FADED,"It's come to my attention that more and more people everyday seem to believe that the Face is created by aliens. Unfortunatley,as cool as it would be, it was not. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cf6391628b9e,D145F56FADED,The face is simply just a natural landform with shadows casting down on it making it look as if it has a face. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+97bdf5f64688,D145F56FADED,"Everyone has just been seeing this information in magazines and on T.V. and believeing it is true,but they never seem to believe the truth that it is not a Face created by aliens. This is common for this planet to create natural landforms as well. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6bf15af5fee1,D145F56FADED,Most people just believe it is created by aliens because they hear information from thier friends or they see it on T.V. or see it in magazines. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7fa91f22abc,D145F56FADED,"The truth is most of these things do not even have enough evidence to prove what they are saying. They just believe it is true because it is intresting. They do not even have the proof that aliens exist,and as cool as it may seem, it is just not true. I know some people will come to their senses and realize what they are saying when they say that they believe aliens exist and people just look at them like they are stupid. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+77588c96ef24,D145F56FADED,"We have no other evidence as well that aliens exist,which means we pretty much have to believe that it is a natural landfrom,which it is. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a755cd18dc66,D145F56FADED,I know most people will stick to thier belief that aliens are real and that they created the Face ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0ac843c7529a,D145F56FADED,",but they are not real and they didn't. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+36b28e6069ae,D145F56FADED,I know I may make some people upset by stating the facts ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+48b4b78d6c2c,D145F56FADED,but Im just telling the truth. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+72003284edd3,D145F56FADED,Having no other evidence leads us to believe it is just a normal natural landform with shadows. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc6a2febf712,D145F56FADED,"I do not blame those of you that believe it was created by aliens,it sounds cool right? ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7e7ba2261bed,D145F56FADED,"But Im sorry to be the bear of bad news, but it is also the truth. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e82996dbf933,D145F56FADED,"These landforms are common on this planet as well. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c3d8178c7517,D145F56FADED,It is not unusual for these landforms to occur. It is just the certain shape that sees to have cought everyone's attention. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db10844dfa34,D145F56FADED,"The shape itself is not what created the Face but in fact it was just the shadows that made it look as if it had,had the shape and form of a face as we humans have. This natural landform is known as a mesa,which you may have heard of before. The point is,these types of things happening on this planet is very common. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+04e78a71bcec,D145F56FADED,I believe myself that it is just a natural landform beacuse I know that we do not have enough evidence to prove that it was anything else. I also believe it is just a natural landform/mesa because I know these things are common on this planet. So don't just going around telling people aliens exist before you get the actual facts. If there were further eveidence leading to make us believe there were aliens it would be fine. We just don't have that extra information or evidence. I hope I finally lead some of you to believe the truth that the Face is just a natural landform. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0c89dfda90f4,D14F3F93CF54,We should be aloud to participate in sporting events with a c average ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ec6758741cce,D14F3F93CF54,being in sports helps kids express their feeling and their sprit of accomplishment. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fa5a0ac6cddc,D14F3F93CF54,If you would take away sports kids will protest and will never be aloud in sports because they can only get a c average. We wont have a big team in anything because nobody can get a b average except a few kids and that will draw to an end in the school sports programs and then well never be able to play sports. We kids need time to express our selves in sports learn to get better at it and keep on trying to achieve our goals in life. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea910c3081ca,D14F3F93CF54,By not letting kids play sports they will change school to a school that lets them play sports with a c average. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b23b3a2ca8c1,D14F3F93CF54,Parents will argue cause their kid can't play the sport that he or she want to play cause they have a c average ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e95766adff39,D14F3F93CF54,I think that kids with a c average or higher could be able to play sports but kids with d or f averages should have to get their grades up and get help if they need help. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bdf0f015317f,D14F3F93CF54,When you change the rules kids wont go to this school or their parents will argue with you about the rule change. This is why you shouldn't change the rules at our school to a student need to have a b average or higher to play sports. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0748f50ebbc5,D1618D180128,"Imagine winning every game basketball game.
+
+But then your star point guard starts flunking tests and his average goes down.
+
+He gets kicked off the team and your team then starts to lose every game.
+
+Well this could be the case if you don't allow students who have a C average to play.
+
+But yet on the other hand, you are also teaching the students a lesson. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+78d63024f787,D1618D180128,"Now in my opinion, i think that teaching the students lessons are more important than being the best team out. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+68f9f6f1bf5c,D1618D180128,"Think about this, in college, they give you scholarships for academics and athletics.
+
+But if you play for a team and your grades aren't so well, are they going to keep you on the team?
+
+Probably not.
+
+This is the same as how you should run our school.
+
+We need to prepare for college and by running our school similar to colleges, it will help us to learn how college is ran. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cdf4e23f0c14,D1618D180128,"That is the same with activities, you have privileges if you do good.
+
+If you have bad grades, then your privileges, such as participating in activities, will be taken away ",Claim,Effective,,,
+19dcdea71cd5,D1618D180128,"These lessons we learn, will hopefully pay off, such as getting reprimanded for doing something bad.
+
+Do you think someone who is extremely bad, for example someone who is always getting in trouble in school for misbehaving, should be allowed to be rewarded?
+
+Well that is not right because he thinks that he can be bad and do anything he wants and still be rewarded in the end.
+
+He is not being taught anything and it isn't fair.
+
+How would you feel if you were a student who did good in school, got good grades, and tried your hardest while some other student did bad and took the easy way out and was rewarded in the same way? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d5a46886656c,D1618D180128,"""Education is the key to success!"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3324f125f3b6,D1618D180128,"Now do you know who said that?
+
+Our president, Barrack Obama.
+
+What this quote means is that education is what's going to lead us to excel.
+
+So by not allowing students with a C average or lower to participate in sports and activities, there is a lesson being taught. I play sports but yet Part of that lesson is summed up by Obama's quote.
+
+Now based on all this, what's more important- being number one or being educated? 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a5b2749936ca,D1618D180128,"All in all, I feel that you should put your new policy into action. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+86f04c61e991,D1618D180128,"We need to learn from everything we do.
+
+This is a good way to show us and teach us about the endings that occur from doing good and bad, wrong or right.
+
+I support your policy all the way and i hope to see it take place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+18580a1c02c7,D176ABB06812,"""Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?"" This seems to me like a bad idea. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+a1a27cb186c9,D176ABB06812,"The driverless car, while having some good qualities, is overwhelmed with bad qualities. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3f8abbe8fc31,D176ABB06812,The risk and danger of driving would greatly increase due to the cars being more in control. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8bcf2bfe1e69,D176ABB06812,"Not only is this dangerous, but the cost of the vehicle will increase because the product is new and ""advanced"". ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+80f55f746444,D176ABB06812,"When adding up the time being taken to drive a car rather than take a taxi, the taxi takes a greater amount of time to deal with ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e0f01c2f4e43,D176ABB06812,"Some of the negative aspects of the driverless car are much greater in numbers than the positive. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0b3637bd4678,D176ABB06812,"The risk of the driverless car is much greater than the risk of simply driving oneself everywhere. Like taxis, putting your life in someone elses hands is always a greater risk. The driverless taxis just double the chances out wrecks considering that the car still has more kinks than anyone cares to recognize. In the reading, it was stated that the car can brake on it's own. While that could be seen as a convienience, it can also be seen as a danger. The car may brake when it's is not supposed to which could cause a wreck. The driverless cars are still not totally able to navigate through traffic with ease ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+883cc6c6e12d,D176ABB06812,"Having a regular car seems to be the safer option, because the driver is in complete control. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+820cda261fbc,D176ABB06812,The driverless car is much more costly to manage than a car controlled by the driver. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb628323fe5b,D176ABB06812,"The product is new, so the initial cost will be much higher. Also, the technology is supposed to be more convienient and user friendly. These positive aspects always seem to cost more than a regular car. The driverless car will have such a large initial cost, the owner of the car will be owing the company in which he bought it money for a long time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b1c8c6450b3f,D176ABB06812,It always seems more convienient to take a taxi rather than drive yourself in a big city. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70b5a6d0a3e3,D176ABB06812,"In larger cities, taxi services are found everywhere, but in smaller towns the number of taxi's are much smaller. It is unneccisary to take a taxi in smaller town because the traffic is more manageable. The taxi services are only needed for large cities to handle all of the traffic. The new driverless cars are still not managable on their own in high areas of traffic. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0e5c3b140ae,D176ABB06812,"The number of cons seems to outweigh the pros. Safety is always a big issue to everyone because it is important that everyone is safe at all times. As the world progresses money seems to be more of an issue. Driverless cars are seemingly too expensive to buy in the first place, let alone the price of gas being a taxi service. The convienience of a taxi is always so pleasant until they are unneccisary, like in smaller areas. Personally, the driverless cars just seem to have too many negative qualities to be worth production. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+fe002a4ccb9b,D1ACADAC5ED4,"School is not exactly something everyone looks forward to nowadays. Teenagers are depressed, anxious, and some incredibly sick. It is so difficult to avoid some of the negative things in life when a student is constantly surrounded by peer pressure and bullying. If given the choice, many students would most likely choose to skip school and stay at home. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+9b9632bd61ab,D1ACADAC5ED4,"if a student was given the option to attend classes from home, it would be beneficial. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c579c27c02b2,D1ACADAC5ED4,it allows those who get sick to stay caught up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d4e486fbebb,D1ACADAC5ED4,protects those who get bullied and assaulted in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8261d54fe30c,D1ACADAC5ED4,"First, online classes by way of video conference are very helpful to those who are sick because they are still able to be taught by a teacher. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+06ddaf83d3db,D1ACADAC5ED4,"Many students come into school even if they are sick. This causes an illness to spread around the entire student body just because one student couldn't miss class. On the other hand, if a student stays home because they are sick, they miss a lot of classwork and aren't able to pay attend the important lessons being taught. One time, I had to stay home because of a stomach bug. I got behind in my classes and was never really able to understand the concepts as well as I could have if I was taught by my teacher like everyone else. I got a very bad grade on the test on these concepts because I was not able to catch up. If I was able to call in to my missed classes, I would have benefited greatly because I could ask questions if I had any, hear the teacher's explanation, and see how the teacher would solve the problem instead of having to figure it all out on my own. On a more serious level, there are some kids who are, unfortunately, terminally ill. They are either physically unable to go to school because of their type of illness or aren't allowed to go out very often because of the risks and dangers they could face. They are more prone to your typical cold and flu, and it is deadlier for them. If they were able to sit in on their classes through a video conference, then they could still feel like they are going to high school like a ""normal"" teenager. Overall, even if attending classes online was only available to those who are sick, it would still help so many kids. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+fa6f2a6d4aec,D1ACADAC5ED4,"Video conferences and attending classes online are also beneficial to a different demographic, those who are bullied and assaulted. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b104ff0d9c9a,D1ACADAC5ED4,"To protect those who fear going to school because they are constantly putting themselves in danger, the school could give them this option of learning from home. There are so many stories of kids getting beat up at school and the school not trying to fix things or not being able to fix things, and this is a way that the schools can help be a part of the solution. There are also numerous stories of students getting sexually assaulted and raped. These students go through every day, trying to avoid those horrible people who did this horrible thing to them, wondering why they have to put in so much work just so this doesn't happen to them again. The book
+
+Speak brings a lot of light on this issue. The main character goes through this avoiding process and, in the end, is unable to completely avoid her rapist. She finds it extremely difficult to see him in school, acting as if he hasn't done anything wrong. If she was given the option to do online schooling, I bet she would have done it in a heartbeat. She dreaded going to school every day and this extra option would have been a godsend for her. Sometimes, you have to take things into your own hands, and if that means making the decision to do schooling from home, then you do what you gotta do. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3415c95cd440,D1ACADAC5ED4,"Some may say that students and teenagers need a chance to socially interact with others, and school helps provide that. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c7ca925c8998,D1ACADAC5ED4,"But, everyone has people they interact with outside of school. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c7d52bfc5622,D1ACADAC5ED4,"Whether it be in the neighborhood or at church, there are many other ways to get your social fix in. Take home-schooled kids, for example. They might be home alone all day trying to get their schoolwork done, but home-schooled students have these groups called co-ops. These co-ops are groups of other students that are home-schooled that come to learn altogether. This helps those who are home-schooled get themselves some time with other students. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d0595d8fc95a,D1ACADAC5ED4,"There are many benefits to having another option for students who are sick and kids who get assaulted and bullied. Many of today's societal issues, whether it be new illnesses spreading or more and more students getting hurt and going to school in fear, affect a teenager's school life. The less focused we are on the issues going on outside of school, the more we are able to focus on what could impact our future. School is vital to our future in today's world, and the administration needs to realize that there are things taking away our focus from school. Teenagers are the future of this world, and the past generations need to realize that things are different that they were in their time. Would you want your children to go to school living in fear? Well, they already are. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+6ce40c0aae57,D1B97A55865A,"I think students should have the opportunity to do community service, but they shouldn't have to do it. ",Position,Effective,,,
+c09afcbdc929,D1B97A55865A,One reason I think community service shouldn't be required is because some students may play sports or be in a club or group and not have any time between school and their extracurricular activity to work in the community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bf506986830a,D1B97A55865A,if you make community service required many students may spend so much time on their community service they may lose the passion for the sport they enjoy so much. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5b540057c7e8,D1B97A55865A,"the students that already do community service may do it for fun or they enjoy helping others, but they may not enjoy it if they are forced to do it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0177d4eb626d,D1B97A55865A,Personally i don't enjoy community service but I still do it by helping the elderly by fixing up their porches or building a ramp for them if they are confined to a wheelchair. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8cf4e08909e0,D1B97A55865A,"I also think many people that do community service enjoy being with people and being social or environmentally friendly. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a0ccff3a95ee,D1B97A55865A,"I know I am more of a social person so I like working for people that I can talk to about things they like to do and stuff I do. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+282add290a3a,D1B97A55865A,also if you make people perform community service many students grades may go down because they are focusing on their community service time than their grades. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7ec0c2dc6e1a,D1DBC69FA526,"Does we are really voting for the elector or someobody else?, sometimes elections can be unfair but ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+29f66b8d599c,D1DBC69FA526,one of the best methos and the one more easily to understand and fair is by electing the president by popular vote. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+63989a63ff0d,D1DBC69FA526,"To beging with,every state should be treatly the same, have the respect campaings and no one state should have advantage or disadvante at the time of voting ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5eac1a3a1437,D1DBC69FA526,"because sometimes representatives can give a advantage or a disadvantage and sometimes can give a catasrophic decision, but also more power for bigger sates that represents 35 million voters like california.""given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people"". 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e5ebc35086cb,D1DBC69FA526,"other example of this can be seen in te elections of 2000,""seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including rhole island and south california,and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. And this just show how when we have electoral collegue can be a disadvantage for candidates, if they know they are not going to win they don't focus on those states,and some people who want to have more options or listen to other persons they cant because they dont see a campaign to convice them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b744e27fca33,D1DBC69FA526,its better to the winner to take all ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c3e23c5790f7,D1DBC69FA526,"cause almost half of the population agrred with the candidate thinking and maturity to select whats best to others,but also whe you are voting fot the state elector you cant control their final vote and sometimes you don't choose who you is your state elector and you don't now if he has the best wisenes to decide,if two presidents in popupal vote get close that mean that  a lot of people agreed with the same person,but that doesnt happen when we have electoral because its just a minimum number and we dont now if everybody in the state really agreed with the representator. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a2f8478e02d7,D1DBC69FA526,"To summarize,if we want a fair election and be part of it, listen to others options, have part of the the decision of our president , and be trheated the same and the our vote really counts we should elect by popular vote.            ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+01680cc67d34,D1FBC3B9A8A4,"I think that community service is not a waste of time, because people care about where they live. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e4ac5a221da5,D1FBC3B9A8A4,"They want to keep it clean so that when family and relatives come over and visit they might want to stay a little bit longer because parts of the city is so clean. Also, it gives a good reputation to the city. Then big time celebrities would want to stay in the city for a little bit if they have a concert or something like that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+70cd6a90499d,D1FBC3B9A8A4,Community service is a good idea because it makes you feel better about yourself when you go somewhere and you see that the city is all clean. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ce1c997133a,D1FBC3B9A8A4,"Also if kids do community service then they will also have a good reputation, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+41077ef41119,D1FBC3B9A8A4,because you will be one of the kids that helped make the city look good. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41cee67418e0,D1FBC3B9A8A4,Other kids don't want to do community service because they think it is a waste of time. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5a0b6e8fe843,D1FBC3B9A8A4,They would rather sit on the couch every day eating potato chips and watching T.V instead of going outside and working and helping your community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1b7eaae80922,D1FBC3B9A8A4,Community service can build friendships and help bond with your family and spend time with them more. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3219bfe91893,D1FBC3B9A8A4,"But instead of making all the students do community service, you should make it were you give kids do community service for extra credit for some of their classes that their struggling with. ",Position,Effective,,,
+de38efdaf30b,D1FBC3B9A8A4,That will help them a lot. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d38eb4b30983,D1FBC3B9A8A4,But some kids think that it is just a waste of time and they say that they have more important things to do. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ee9160027c29,D1FBC3B9A8A4,Also I think that we need to start a community garden. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9acb9cdba4b8,D1FBC3B9A8A4,"I think it is a good idea, because everybody can just help out and talk to each other and make new friends. We can grow plants together. And when vegetables and fruit are ready to be picked we can take them home and someone can make a pie ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2dd55d4b42e7,D23F65F4652B,The Face is just a natural landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+acc9affa8956,D23F65F4652B,It happened 25 years ago. You can say its from aliens but it is not an alien! Iv'e seen pictures of Face. From reshearch only robots walked on Mars. Aliens are not even real. There are camras om thoes robots so they would know if they seen anything. Have you ever got a warning that an alien invation was about to occur? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a8e499711722,D23F65F4652B,I think that some dust and rocks made this shape occur. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2458880773b1,D23F65F4652B,"Scientist have thier studies. My question is how did this alien form this pop up form. If u say it was a alien does it live under the dust. I don't think so,because it adventually is going to die. This is nonsense to belive that aliens walked on Mars and formed a type of shape. It is just a natural form. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f46bead3d9a9,D23F65F4652B,"Why do you think this is an alien. One reason they would is because of it's shape. Do you have any evidence to prove to that this is an aliens shape. They probably would say no,because I do not see any antenas. That is a big hint to tell if that was an alien or not.
+
+Were's the body all you can see is a face so why assum it's an alien. Perfect good sense would tell you aliens aren't real. It's just a from that was created by natual resources on the planet. Use your research and don't go believing anything crazy. Such,as aliens living on Mars with just a head. I mean use common sense. What do you physically see on an alien. A big head,antena's,body,and wierd looking feet. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1b32feba2c1d,D23F65F4652B,"This is not an alien people it is just a from that was created by natural resources. So don't go believing nothing foolish that we have aliens roaming different planets. Tust in NASA the greatest of all. Don't believe anyone who isn't and professional lke use. Nor trust a person with fause information,because they will have your mind,and you worried.             ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+56c880e6b400,D242BBCBEAFB,Some student can take classes at home because they could find a subject of course that like. Learning websites can help them get better at what they do ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+b7e393809ac7,D242BBCBEAFB,It could benefit ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c93909f91914,D242BBCBEAFB,they it would seem easier to go on different classes or to take a video to study a subject ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cd02d64e8f23,D242BBCBEAFB,"For example, taking classes online would give you a head start. Many other schools have students at home take taking these course and have them apply for it. It is like a benefit for them to take some opportunity to get taught about something they have learn or to have a different way of learning it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f82de67a676,D242BBCBEAFB,"I will think they would able to do this if they are interested. For example, Home-schooling could that much money. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d1c3fdeda513,D242BBCBEAFB,"1. They want to try out some different learning strategies.
+
+2. They can apply online.
+
+3. They can try taking some subjects that they like. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+be97eaf80b4a,D242BBCBEAFB,"In conclusion, it could be able to work for the home-schoolers to also have an education because they did not go to public but have it at home. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c18daa8b7396,D251CC495A0E,"I feel that the way we, the people, vote today is very unfair ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+792bcae77d11,D251CC495A0E,We should change the voting to popular vote for the president of the United States ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3472b021a1a3,D251CC495A0E,The majority of people don't care about voting for the next United States prsident because they don't get to chose who will win ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ef0a0ca3b35a,D251CC495A0E,The people that get to vote for one's state might not think about what what the remaining others would want ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+23c5beb3aa6b,D251CC495A0E,"In source one, this section tells the reader what an electoral college is and how it works. Paragraph two sums up what this system is, ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting if the electoral votes by Congress. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3234fcbcefbf,D251CC495A0E,"the people dont get to directly say who they want as president. The people of a state get to vote for who they want, but it is ultimately up to the state electors on who will get the vote from that particular state ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e22de957e73,D251CC495A0E,"There could be a ton of people voting for one president, and then there might be less votes for a president who may be even better. Ultimately what this system comes down to is the people don't vote for their next president. They are selecting a name that might not do anything to their country ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35b91cad8073,D251CC495A0E,Source two talks about the electoral college and how the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b56e86893888,D251CC495A0E,"In paragraph nine,  the text says, ""... according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost presidency, over 60 percent of voters  would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" The electoral college is responsible for picking electors, who can go behind the peoples back and chose the president nobody wanted. This system or process is a total disaster. Paragraph thirteen states, ""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0d582a9152aa,D251CC495A0E,"Paragrapgh twenty-three, ""It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state- Democrates in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+da7519cbe77b,D251CC495A0E,"If these people were to vote by the system we have now, their vote would have no effect. This leads to the people living in these states to not vote. They don't even pay attention to the campaign anymore. They know that they won't do anything to the votes or who will become president. They couldn't care less ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+abd5cbbe4112,D251CC495A0E,"We should get rid of the electoral college all together. This system is not working for a lot of people and this is why many people dont care enough to vote anymore. There are people that vote for our state. Why should the people care? If we switched to popular vote, our country might participate in picking who the next president of the United States will be. When people have a voice, they will use it as much as they possibly can.                             ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+13b65f87da46,D279FF9C83D7,Are driverless cars the right choice for our future? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+361185351092,D279FF9C83D7,No i believe that they are not the right thing for our future ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d7ee247f1746,D279FF9C83D7,they seem unsafe ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ac78ac89d1c,D279FF9C83D7,our country is already lazy enough. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30534a5d64eb,D279FF9C83D7,"In paragraph nine it states that ""our traffis laws for our states are under the assumpiton that the only safe way for a car is to have a human under control"", and thats beause our traffic laws are based on human error. So basically if a said law is broken then the human gets the bad end of the deal, but if its a driverless car who will get the blame for a traffic law being broken the company that made it or the owner of the driverless car? Also in paprgraph 7 it basically said the car can drive its self unless if it needs human help and that the driver must always has his or her hands on the wheel. Basically saying we are able to regain control if needed, but what if we couldn't because the car is acting up and then we get injured or get others hurt. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+45976dedd35c,D279FF9C83D7,So what I am trying to say is you never know if its safe. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7da4550131dc,D279FF9C83D7,So think about it. Do you think that driverless cars are right for our future or no? ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+378e01372dce,D2D4AD42B2E1,"I believe for a student to have a B average should be able to participate in school sports or in other school activities is a reasonable policy. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+0381a3dbbbe7,D2D4AD42B2E1,It is privilege to be able to participate in school sports and activities cause you learn more things that are useful in the future and help you gain physical strength on some levels ,Claim,Effective,,,
+743c9fd6d3e4,D2D4AD42B2E1,"You also should keep this as a school policy because you shouldn't be able to participate if you are either failing a class or struggling to pass that class you need you won't be able to have any ability to do so in school sports and all. The student is just taking the class for nothing if he/she is failing just to be in a sport and that they don't care about their grade. He/she needs to keep a B average to be able to participate for that gain of socializing and gaining special abilities. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+34605414e452,D2D4AD42B2E1,"As I student myself think that I keep a pretty good grade average and with my other students who are C averages students should also have help keeping a B average. I would love to start a tutoring club to help them, but some students may just be to stubborn to admit they need help then that will lead to the kicking off the team or club. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6a8baad253c1,D2D4AD42B2E1,"So, I think we should urge students to come if they need help or at least want to stay on the team or club. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+91e5895e425a,D30490AE8641,I'm writing you this letter to inform you on what i think you should do. I know you are trying whether or not if all students should be required to do any community service. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+59b7d146970a,D30490AE8641,Community service is good but not all the students would wan' t you to make it a requirement ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d21a0ee754eb,D30490AE8641,I think that you need to think about the community service. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+98914cd69a69,D30490AE8641,"Some of the kids are already doing some community service and they would probably like the help, but what do you think the other kids who don't wan' t to do community service will react to you saying all students now have to do community service. The kids who have to do might try to get their parents to let them drop out of school, because i wouldn't want to do community service. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f08029a4b6cb,D30490AE8641,If you make the kids do community service the community might get into better shape than it already is ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a4c4af233c86,D30490AE8641,You also have to think that kids wouldn't have enough time to get some of their homework finished or be able to go to their after school activities. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a9b2a74391e1,D30490AE8641,"I think that if you make the kids do it they wouldn't, you would have to punish them for not doing the community service so that would just make the students made at you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb9f90aea39a,D30490AE8641,The parents are a very hard subject ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+51940b0ec861,D30490AE8641,"Some of the parents might like their kids going out and doing some community service instead of being home all of the time, but there are other parents that probably wouldn't like their kids being away from home any longer than being at school. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cbaf5135a3d,D30490AE8641,The teachers at school are also a very big subject ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+588eab63f1d3,D30490AE8641,They wouldn't be able to give out as much homework so they would intern have to do more work at school. Doing more work at school would also mean the students would be less happy than they already were knowing that they have to come home just for more community service they had to do. There are some teachers that pretty much just give out homework and that would ruin there whole school year curriculum. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2bd3cd66856c,D30490AE8641,Truthfully who wants to do more work than they already have to do. In my opinion school work is very hard without knowing you will have to go home knowing that after working all day at school the students just have to go home and work more. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f0f79af10d8f,D32804D6C269,"Twenty-five years ago NASA had found something on thr planet Mars. Many people for twenty-five years have wondered if the ""Unmasking the Face on Mars' was really made by aliens and if could be a accient artifact left behind by aliens. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+b4ce9666c81d,D32804D6C269,"""The Unmasking the Face on Mars"" had probably lead lots of people to thinking that their could be a really big chance of aliens being real. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9d3c45e1fbf5,D32804D6C269,Ever since the face on Mars was discoverd lots of people thought that their really could be alien life it could be just a natural piece of landform on the planet Mars. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b1bcc8739a3a,D32804D6C269,If you look closley at the 1976 picture its a low quality picture since its from 1976 than twenty-three years later in 1998 it was taken again lots of people who had seen it were not sastisfed it was a winter april in 1998 it was also a cloudy time of year on Mars. Even though the cameras took the picture ten times sharper it had been really cloudy so you could barley see the picture to have real proof if it was created by aliens. Later in 2001 they had gave it a other shot making it the most recent. The 2001 picture had still been some what the same as the 1976 picture ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9cecd167ccad,D32804D6C269,To me its just a normal natural landform that was created itself by the planet. lots of things on earth look like other things it is just the way the landfrom is created into. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8917cef530b5,D34054ADD2FB,"The Electoral College is a system which was established to elect the president of the United States of America. In this system, each state receives a group of electors. The number of electors each state is awarded is based on the representation a state has in Congress. The total number of electors per state equals the number of people a state has in the House of Representative plus the two senators a state has. In a state, the electors pledge to vote for the candidate who wins the popular vote ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bbe0bd2b2cf4,D34054ADD2FB,This system is simply unneeded in modern times and is unneccesarily complicated. The Electoral College must be abolished. ,Position,Effective,,,
+8a113f68b887,D34054ADD2FB,the Electoral College should be eradicated because it is simply unreliable ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e76abf977e6b,D34054ADD2FB,"The result of a direct election would be more transparent and would make the citizens of this country certain the election was democratic and just. The issue lies in the fact that voters are technically only voting for electors to cast a vote for a candidate, and not for a candidate themselves. These electors pledge to vote in favor of the candidate who rightly wins the popular vote in a state, but some attempt to be defiant. For instance, according to Bradford Plumer's article, ""Back in 1960, segregationists in the Lousiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy"" (11). If the Lousiana legislature was successful in their attempt to be defiant, electoral votes would not go to Kennedy despite him winning the popular vote in that state. Another way in which the Electoral College is unreliable is that it allows for a tied vote. There are 538 electoral votes in the system currently in use, meaning it is possible for two candidates to receive 269 votes each. This may seem unlikely, but it is more likely to occur than some might think. For instance, as according to Plumer's aforementioned article, an electoral tie would have occured in 1968 if only 41,971 more votes were for the losing candidate. Additionally, in the 1976 election, if 5,559 voters in the swing state of Ohio, and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had simply voted in favor of the candidate with the minority of the votes, a tie would have occured. In order to resolve a tie, the House of Representatives casts votes to decide the winner of the election. At this point, the impact of each representative is skewed so representatives of states with lower population can more easily decide the state's vote. This happens because each state only votes once, so the few representatives of a small state such as Nebraska can decide who to vote for rather easily, while in California, 55 representatives with different views must colloborate to cast a single vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+669c3717b2d7,D34054ADD2FB,the Electoral College must be abolished because it does not properly refelct the views of the nation. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+47b6cf47e5e3,D34054ADD2FB,"Citizens' wishes will not always be equivalent to what the electors vote for. This occurs partly because of the winner-take-all system. In this system, the winner of the popular vote in an individual state wins all of the electoral votes a state has. According to the Office of the Federal Register, all but two states use this system. These two states are Nebraska and Maine. As a result of the winner-take-all system, it is possible that a presidential candidate loses the overall popular vote, but wins more electoral votes and thus wins the election. This occurance happened in the infamous 2000 election, when Al Gore won the popular vote but lost to George W. Bush by a mere five electoral votes. If the public indicated they wanted Al Gore as president, why should Bush have won due to this unfair system? It simply doesn't make sense. The winner-take-all system also results in political campaigns to focus their efforts in only certain regions. Some states very predictably vote either for the Republican candidate or for the Democratic candidate. Take Texas, for instance, which has traditionally always voted red. A Democratic candidate knows he should not focus his campaign in Texas, because he realizes his best efforts won't allow him to win the popular vote there and thus win the electoral votes. Because of the tendencies of certain states, many electoral votes are practically predetermined. The states which do not typically only vote in favor of one side are labelled ""swing states"". With the way the Electoral College works, the few states which are a toss-up carry the most weight. Presidential candidates will usually spend most of their time in these swing states, and very little time in others. For example, in the 2000 election, seventeen states were not visited by either candidate. Supporters of the Electoral College view the disproportional focus of campaigns as a positive. According to Richard A. Posner's article in favor of this corrupt system, ""The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constituion..."" (21) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+eea30dbe8517,D34054ADD2FB,"While it might seem reasonable for larger states to have a larger impact than smaller states, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+d881b3fe4a80,D34054ADD2FB,"it simply isn't a fair way to go about having an election. Voters should each have the same impact, and they would have exactly that in a direct election ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+144225652df1,D34054ADD2FB,"Presently, voters in Florida, for instance, have more impact on the election than a voter in Wyoming. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0c98a7cebaaa,D34054ADD2FB,Supporters also claim the focus on swing states is beneficial because residents of swing states should be more politically informed due to their state's importance in the election ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9dce6a4b5745,D34054ADD2FB,"This notion is simply a fabrication in order to make the Electoral College seem as if it causes America to be more informed, because there would be no need for residents of specific states to pay closer attention to candidates than residents of others if a direct election were to take place. The Electoral College does not properly reflect the desire of the nation's population, and thus should be replaced. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+41fd6166db4d,D34054ADD2FB,"In retrospect, the Electoral College must be abolished. It is an inherently unfair system and it does not reflect the views of American voters ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+26d4651044c1,D3C4B340AB3F,I think if a student has a c average you should give him or a chance ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e313ab4c55ab,D3C4B340AB3F,It would be un fair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf77d26f3158,D3C4B340AB3F,if a student did his or her best and all the could give is a c then you should let them play. A lot of students aren't able to pull of a b average so give those students a chance to play sports. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ab1d1e74c3ad,D3C4B340AB3F,a c average isn't that bad they are still passing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a15329161ab,D3C4B340AB3F,but they can play sports and anything else they want. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e653c9e905a1,D3C4B340AB3F,there are so many students that only have sports some people that don't have sports they end up doing nothing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d235ffa21fa7,D3C4B340AB3F,People drop out of school cause they think if they don't have the grades to play sports they cant do anything with their life. So i know you don't want that to happen ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+043be9976642,D4442F757F02,Community service is a very important to me because its the right ting to do ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e880f60ee665,D4442F757F02,I would rather drive down the road and not see plastic bags and beer bottles on the side of the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+27e7219da90b,D4442F757F02,I want my community to look beautiful. Not only my community but the whole town. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+172459ff10af,D4442F757F02,"Cleaning the road isn't the only form of community service. If people don't want to get dirty, the they can go help tutor kids, or read at the library. They can go to the homeless shelter or Faith Missions and help organize or feed people. They can come up to the school and help my dad, the janitor, clean the school. There is many things other than cleaning the road that they can do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a0a45a95aa6,D4442F757F02,kids should want to help out. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+34bb4cfa7dc5,D4442F757F02,"they don't have the incinive to help because its not required. Honestly, think about this. Jesus helped because he cared. God did not tell Him to come down here and do nothing. He told Him to help the sick, feed the hungry, heal the lepers, and care for the weak. Jesus did all of this stuff and much more because He cared about this stuff, plus He had the incinive to do it because His father told Him to. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a27f56aea0e,D4442F757F02,If you would make this a requirement for students ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2e0dd93c47b7,D4442F757F02,sure some would have there moans and disagreements and maybe not do anything to help ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+3bd0a575cab8,D4A3E7EC982E,In this essay i will be explaining the difference and similarities and the pros and cons of the electoral college and opposing it ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+688a526a7cae,D4A3E7EC982E,I personally like the idea of having the people themselves vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+dbec45707cf8,D4A3E7EC982E,because the electors could change their mind ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+918cf4fb0ba0,D4A3E7EC982E,because it makes more sense to just vote for who you think should be president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4d60a8d3abde,D4A3E7EC982E,one reason to pick electors is because its less people to keep count of. Having these electors is another step in the voting procces but it keeps things going easier. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e007b980aabb,D4A3E7EC982E,"In conlusion, i dont agree with this, there is almost nothing i can think of that is good about this, unfortunutely. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2787ddef1d8d,D4A3E7EC982E,"Secondly, The great points of having the people themselves vote (which i agree with) ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+77bad5ec90a1,D4A3E7EC982E,"One reason, is that electors can change their mind and vote for whoever they want and it could completely change the election. Secondly, This requires the president to go to all states exculding no one! This way all states feel equal and they feel like all of their votes matter. Another great reason is that they focus more on toss up states where people tend to pay more attention. Another good reason, is that bigger states get more attention. This is important because he can reach out to more people rather than a smaller state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99c616943394,D4A3E7EC982E,"In conclusion, I think having people do the elections themselves is the better option ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cb0861bb9bfe,D4BB02CCC116,I am writing this letter to convince you that you should not do this policy change. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+47bbe4802bf9,D4BB02CCC116,"There is many students that may have a high C, and it wouldn't be fair if they didn't get to play sports because of it. Read on and I'm going to explain why you shouldn't do this. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+829721fb0ad5,D4BB02CCC116,This is not a good idea because it wouldn't be fair to some students if you take there privileges away from them because of one bad grade. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3d4c487efe28,D4BB02CCC116,"I specifically think that this situation is by far not fair at all. For example, if a student had just one bad grade, and it was a high C, they still would not have any of the privileges to participate in any sport activities.
+
+I am telling you not to do this to kids because, it is not right to take this away from them. Maybe if they start participating in other school activities such as, math counts, the academic team, and so on, this could help kids bring up there grade in certain areas. So in my opinion I think you shouldn't do this to children just because of one grade. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d3329fd5282,D4BB02CCC116,"Some more of my ideas, is that you should let anybody who wants to participate in sports still do it if they have a bad grade. You should let them play any sport they wanted to but if there grades start to drop, not let them anymore because this means they are to focused on sports to do there school work. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+73b1a901547c,D4BB02CCC116,"These are some reasons, that you shouldn't do the policy change. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+498e04135a07,D4BFB840A534,"I believe that all students should be required to do community service, But i also believe that students should not have to be forced to do it, if they choose not to do it then it will be there fault. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+2a44201ed84c,D4BFB840A534,The students that have done there community service hours will not have to go though a struggle to do it later in life and that they care to help other will bring good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3ec6c9225389,D4BFB840A534,The ones who choose that they have things better to do then community service they will later in life learn that they should have done it a long time ago. This i something i will be willing to do is because i am smart enough to know that i have a better chance to get a good job faster. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3d3141a1d8f,D4BFB840A534,"I have also thought the ones who is also willing to there community service, some are not able to finds things to do so me and other students and you should get together and help out the ones who are willing but don't know what to do. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9dfcb7e07b4b,D4BFB840A534,Like we can set up a rally and other thing that will help to get other going and moving. We can also probably change the minds of others to do things by making it fun for others that is not intesterd. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e69859661f35,D4D35DDC74EB,It is my belief that our community could use community service ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+45780ab9d3d2,D4D35DDC74EB,"it helps our school as it not only provides students with a ambition to help their city, but it shows them how good it feels to do something helpful. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ba6b28d8eb6,D4D35DDC74EB,"Also, if the students are out there helping then they may inspire others to do the same. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9673f1d6a8b7,D4D35DDC74EB,"As long as they are out there they aren't wasting away with their lives and succumbing to peer pressure, anything is better. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81c07a44ffbf,D4D35DDC74EB,"The feeling to help the environment around us is what we look up to so, not only are we doing ourselves good, we also do good to the young ones that look up to and respect us so that one day they may also aspire to help the environment around them ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+546e7c9e7d9d,D4D35DDC74EB,"There are of course dangers that come along with the tough job of helping our community, an example would be, predators prowling the area ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+71e8da098be0,D4D35DDC74EB,this shows that we would need to protect the students while they are working. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+9b7a3ce517d9,D4D35DDC74EB,"Also, students may turn a blind eye if they want to help, so they will fit in with their crowd of friends. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+684da30716d6,D4D35DDC74EB,"With the threat of global warming, the Earth needs all the help it can get, with all the smoking, littering and polluting in general we need to band together and keep our Earth safe.
+
+So all in all, it would be a hard project, helping our community and all, but pulling together we would be able to do it.
+
+Sincerely, just another student looking out for the Earth, ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ef63ee9c48ef,D50B2015BE66,Lately there has been lots of tense debates on whether to keep Electoral College votes or not. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+05e05cd0ced6,D50B2015BE66,Well I agree with the citizens who do agree on keeping our votes. Its just rude to take away something we rightfully deserve. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+030cdebcdfe8,D50B2015BE66,Electors come to the campus or a specific area to give their great speech that appeals to what we want to be done just to get our votes. Well Mr. Senator it isn't ok for you and the others in office to just take away Electral College voting. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1ee26cce8992,D50B2015BE66,"According to this article written by : The Office of the Fedral register,
+
+"" the Founding fathers esatblished it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popuar vote of qualifed citizens.""
+
+that little bit of information says a popular vote I believe the Electoral College is that popular vote. After the electors are selected and meet to discuss who would be Preident and Vice President but also need to count the Electoral votes. Not only does the congress count the electoral votes , there is 538 electors but at least 270 votes are required to elect the preisdent. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+af366551995c,D50B2015BE66,"In another article it explains how the year of
+
+""2000 was a fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century.""
+
+There is a example
+
+Al Gore he won the popular vote but not the presidency .And that majority would have preferred a direct election. Also the electoral voters system voted slate, an example given from the story was if I lived in Texas I would vote for Jonh Kerry, then vote for slate of 34 democratic electorsthat pledged to Kerrry. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+57751f10cdd4,D50B2015BE66,"Even with great arguments of wiping out Electoral votes , it will still remain
+
+""unfair outdated and irrational ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+bd389e588c33,D50B2015BE66,""" I see a picture which shows the number of electroal votes that each state is granted. Some states are granted more than other states but that doesn't stop them from voting. There are fueds over the outcome,picking the president, then goes into the swing states, Big states, and run-off elections . ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f86e8dc1bd2d,D50B2015BE66,"Now the certainty of outcome of a Electoral vote its not likey to beat a popular vote. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd7694d7d346,D50B2015BE66,"But electoral votes win because those votes are more than popular votes. Back in 2012 voting the article says"" Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to only 51.3 percent of the poplular votes.""
+
+and that help Obama win on the winner-take-all basis. Now with picking the president they can't recieved gain of votes where ever there from or very well favored. A president with regional appeal isn't likey to be a successful president.
+
+Now those swing states, with the winner-take-all method and being awarded with electoral votes. But voters in the toss-up states are the ones who really pay attention and listen to competators in the campagion. And decide the election. But in the big states electoral college restores the political balance which large states lost by virtue. The bug states get more of the canidate attention than small states because big states has more population. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c291ac9d8719,D50B2015BE66,"Refering back to the article it says electoral avoids the problems with elections , with that no canidate recieves no votes from that majority. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+04621f41a164,D50B2015BE66,"Imagine back in 1968 with Nixon and Clinton in 1992 both only gotten 43 pecent of the popular votes . The pressure of a run-off election is when no canidate wins , it will greatly make things complicated in the presidental elction. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+58a815b2bf13,D50B2015BE66,"So no Senator you and your fellow peers whom decided to eliminate electoral votes is dispicable. When we actually have a chance to vote you take it away. Its very clear that without the electoral votes it woud be more than just presidental complication it would also be complication with decideing electors, presidntal electors and the big states who canidates get there precious votes from would have a hard time winning.
+
+I agree to keeping the Electoral College vote and not to change it to no popular vote because popular vote over rules most of the time. So please over think your decsion with other senators and keep Electoral College votes.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6024d8d2f310,D52ADC09CF36,"First of all, the Electoral College is regarrded as a non-democratic method of selecting a president that should be over powered by declaring the canidate who gets the most popular votes the winner. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2e334e9e9df6,D52ADC09CF36,"The Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense, it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bb4917c489c0,D52ADC09CF36,The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ed403dabd731,D52ADC09CF36,"So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does. Most people vote for a presidant just because everyone else did, his/her race, his/her gender, and other things like that. Voting for that presidant with no knowlage about them or what they are capable of. But people tend to vote for that president out of majority because if 50% of the largest state voted ""yes"" for this president then we vote for him and then he/she is now president and is not doing anything right and ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d591c6b577a,D52ADC09CF36,"they think that if you take away this or you do that it will solve the problem. But it won't, it'll only make things worse and upset a lot of people. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d32dc394a95c,D52ADC09CF36,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors ? They can be anyome not holding public office. Sometimes statee conversations, sometimes the presidential candidates themsleves. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4a42f965465f,D52ADC09CF36,The single best argument against the electoral college is that we might call the disaster factor ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9ba08e288d5,D545B7CB039D,I feel that we should change the Electoral collage to a direct vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b2a24c7010ca,D545B7CB039D,"As the author states in source 2 ""Under the Electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors.."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+218c63fd23d8,D545B7CB039D,I believe the people should have a better say in who gets to run the USA. We should aboilish the electoral collage because people need to be able to vote for the president himself not his slate of electors. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c8203a7988da,D545B7CB039D,"Also some electors don`t actually vote for who they are representing, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4637710150cc,D545B7CB039D,"And the electoral collage is just not fair. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5f286e9b143,D545B7CB039D,"The people should have a better say in who their president gets to be. They shouldn`t be voting for the Slate electors, but should be voting for the president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+29cc62e9deaf,D545B7CB039D,Sometimes the votes get overulled by the popular vote. The electors really only focus on the swing states. That`s just not right at all. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4b3c2b263543,D545B7CB039D,Belive it or not some of the electors dont even vote for the president they are representing ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db8853b0a975,D545B7CB039D,It doesn`t make any sense to do that. The electors should be voting for who they represent. That just increases my points value. The people should be able to vote for who they want. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+23b03b5ab353,D545B7CB039D,"The electoral collage is just unfair. The state legislators pick the electors, and some of those electors could always defy the qill of the people ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+30803013397b,D545B7CB039D,"It is unfair to the voters mainly because of the winner take all system, They mainly only focus on the swing states. Sometimes people get confused about the electors anf vote for the wrong canidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a6565c5f7a29,D545B7CB039D,"Many people can`t figure out if they want to get rid of the Electoral collage are keep it in place. The Electoral collage should be gotten rid of because the people should have a say, and some elecotrs are not loyal and can go agaisnt the will of the people. In the wise words of Bob Dole ""Abolish the electoral collage!""    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eec98049ebf6,D5667559AD62,"Have you wondered if the face on mars was aliens or a landform? If you did im going to help you answer that question that you have beenn wondering. I used to want to know what the face on mars really was NASA said it was a landform but reporters, people in movies, and in magazines thought it was aliens. Who would you believe someone who has actually been studying about it for the longest and went to school for it or your favorite director.
+
+I thought it was aliens too because of all the magazines and movies i had seen about it but they were all jumping to conlusions. So then i decided to do a little research myself. After i started researching i started to write articles and put them online or in the newspaper, and anywhere else that i could ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d44a4f288538,D5667559AD62,During all of my research i found out that it actually is a landform. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1547d7e2cc87,D5667559AD62,As in the article it says not all scientists beleived it was an alien im not saying none of them did but some of them didnt ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+69b4eeba3486,D5667559AD62,"eventually i got a call from NASA they wanted me to join them. They said my work was outstanding and they would love to work with me, my immediate answer was yes. My immediate answer was yes because NASA was my dream job even when i was younger i wanted to be in NASA. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5f885eb0f0ec,D5667559AD62,We began to research even more traveling in space trying to find more clues. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6fc738c61dbd,D5667559AD62,We had no luck for quite some time until... we had a storm and after that we went back to look and there was another face. We immediately documented the photos and got to writing so we could publish it. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5932f9b6805b,D5667559AD62,Everyone believed the movie stars and all those other people becasue they have lots of money but they didnt think about intelligence ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dca60cd4d70a,D5667559AD62,"NASA has lots of it i believed the rich people to at first,but i failed to see the intelligence until i started researcing on my own. When I joined NASA i really found the intelligence now im employee of the month for coming up with the idea to go back. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+754a3669cf2d,D5667559AD62,"Everyone else had given up becasue they were upset because they felt as if they let people down. So I decided to go back one more time, and i found what we all were looking for!          ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6eee38c7f391,D584B293A28E,Electoral college should go away. electoral college is unfair ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c405bfbd5297,D584B293A28E,"each party picks a slate of electors,although it only takes trust to pick that elector it is unfair because it is what the people want. there are 4 reaons why electoral college shouldnt be used today. one may be that votes arent from people and votes are only elected by the electors,and the polular vote most likley always win. which means that people vote for the elector and the highest votes from one state to the elector,the president now has that state and now has votes from it. this is why ecltoral college shouldnt be used today. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf7e518e8f9c,D584B293A28E,it is unfair that we cant vote for our own president and the electors get to choose. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd51fb0e1e81,D584B293A28E,one reason why electoral college is bad for the people is because of the thing called disastor factor. this is a bad affect to the voting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7543b4776c66,D584B293A28E,"this happen in 1960 and was with John F. kennedy. what happen was the state legislatures are technically responsible for the electors and that the electors could always tell the people what they want. this was a key factorbut,what to fiasco did he helped changed everything. and here to today we still use electoral college. although we still use fiasco method it is getting better but still is a disastor and i think we should just make something that the people want. this woild be better and maybe an easier way to choose a president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc51eaf6a318,D584B293A28E,another unfair subject that electoral college does for voting is the prospect of tie ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96016bc3e3ad,D584B293A28E,"this is a method in which only states with a certain amount of people allowed to vite. this is an unfair method because, for example hawaii has only a little amount of people and cant vote. also many other states cannot vote because of there population. this is very unfair and should be stopped. every state should be able vote. and again there is only one vote for each state and this method should be voted by state but by people to get a better examnation of what people want. since each state only cast one vote it is the senates job to pretty much vote for the elector. we should let the people vote the people vote themsleves so there is a more accurate vote,than just a single vote for the whole state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d6f5b7dc35dd,D584B293A28E,another reason why the electoral college is unfair is because of the winner takes it all method in each state ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7988f56a0bbf,D584B293A28E,"this is a very unfair method because i do agree that every state should be able to vote. it doesnt matter if the state only has a population of twenty. every state should be able to vote for preseident, esspecially if you are old enough to vote. it is only fair. there are states such as rhode island and south carolina that are too small and other 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to vote. this is unfair . the system should start letting at least every state vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c0b3fef224bd,D584B293A28E,"these are reasons why electoral college shouldnt be used today,this is a very unfair way of voting. forget the electoral college method and just start letting the people vote. yes it might hard to keep track but this way, if you let the people vote they will know what the people want and it would be much more accurate than saying one vote for each state . they should really take time thinking of ways to make this better and fair. because electoral college isnt fair at all. they should abolish electoral college from the united states. go back to directed elections. bob dole was someone who said that they shouldnt allow this, and i certainly agree that electoral college shouldnt be allowed.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+90db87287ff3,D5B5FD51EE53,The Electoral College is a very organized way of handling the Presidential election. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c684143ee2e7,D5B5FD51EE53,It makes certain that tthere is usually a landslide victory. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7d6bc558b0d,D5B5FD51EE53,"The locations of the states help the canidates and the Electoral Colloege states that you have to have transregional appeal.
+
+The swing states such as Florida, are the states presidental canidates pay attention to. The votes there are the ones thats can decide the election. The lager states, due to there large population, also get more Electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d3390b526ca7,D5B5FD51EE53,The Electoral Colloege has helped avioded run-off elections by reducing the complication of it all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ca0c62ec98a,D5B5FD51EE53,The Electoral College is made up of five-hundred thirty-eight electors and all that is need to elect a president is two-hundred seventy electoral votes. The electoral College is the easier and less complicated way of electing a president. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+da37cc263aa4,D5B5FD51EE53,"Though whether the Electoral College is democratic, it is not true in a modern sense. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+20a69304a20c,D5B5FD51EE53,"It is still very practical and less complicated. The people instead would vote for slates of electors but, they still would be voting towards you canidate. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+18c0459c3af9,D5B5FD51EE53,The Electoral College is the method that we should keep.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e80a2b187902,D5BF9F290808,"Your understanding can save all the memories and also can help you in your work or things that you have to do for the improvement,you don't have to do other thing that we don't need,because we only wan't that the government can tell us that we can trust in you and with ours help everybody have the hope in you that the futura that is coming is better than this.
+
+For be honest I wan't to know you for put in order the points that each other have to know and share for the welfare of the state,basically we only have to explain what thing is wrong ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+68e8c04cdc18,D5BF9F290808,"for example , the elections for the presidents,vice presidents and senators in the country and each other of the states and places on it. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e5e8e25554ff,D5BF9F290808,The smallest states in the country can be not used like a thing or somethin like that because although the government says that we are in a samll state we have straights and that straights says that we can be free in the limits that we have. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+477fc5fdff44,D5D689030CA2,"I think that you should require all student to do a little community service, because of these three reasons. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+20de78ef7494,D5D689030CA2,"My first reason is that everyone should help out the community sometime it doesn't have to be a long hours, but doing so can build character. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+17d1d5f44158,D5D689030CA2,My second reason is that the community can benefit from this requirement if you put it into action. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+704e3328a6e3,D5D689030CA2,My third reason is most parents want student to help out around the house or neighborhood that can be classified as a sort of community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+812ddc133247,D5D689030CA2,"I hope I have enlightened you on my insight to this matter. Again my three main reasons were one, everyone should help out in the community at least a little bit. Two, the community can benefit from this requirement if you put it into action. Three, most parents want student to help out around their house or neighborhood and for most parents this would make them happy to know that students are contributing to the well being of the community. Thanks I hope you can come to a decision soon. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2ba21caf4242,D5F6593584F8,I am asking you why are you changing that the students should have a grade average of a B to play sports that's I am writing to tell you why it should be changed. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+99f55d46adcd,D5F6593584F8,even that the students make a c average in there class they should still play until they fail the class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30d927798d9e,D5F6593584F8,when someone get injured and where is his back up oh wait he's not here because he is studying at home and he has a C average in he math class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+64a73301ff00,D5F6593584F8,when he not here playing we have to forfeit the game because its your fault and everyone will boo at you. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0de9c9e27cc1,D5F6593584F8,people like to play sports and when they don't they get mad at you because they failed in there class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b894fcaa4580,D5F6593584F8,"So I gave you reasons why you shouldn't change the sports play to a B average you should have make it until they fail at least. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ec78444a0c51,D68F66581BF1,"I believe that students should be allowed to bring their cell phones to school, and use them when they have free times. examples(lunch periods, and other free times.) ",Position,Adequate,,,
+350e083ff92d,D68F66581BF1,"One reason, they need to get a-hold of their parents because their practice was cancelled ,or game etc and they cant wait until the school day is over. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ab5f506f05f,D68F66581BF1,I believe that if you accept this policy they can get a-hold of their parents ahead of time instead of waiting until the last minute. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+93e1639135ec,D68F66581BF1,"A second reason is that if you accept this policy a lot more kids will pay attention, and you wont have to worry about them using their phone in class or any inappropriate places. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e892a956509f,D68F66581BF1,you wont have to worry about the hassle of having to call parents to come pick up the phone. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c25d373d853f,D68F66581BF1,"last, but not least, they will just have better connection because they wont have to worry about getting information at the last minute. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66ae77e08c43,D68F66581BF1,they can let people know things ahead of time. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0336a7900bac,D68F66581BF1,I would like to be able to use my phone at school just because my phone is very important to me. I hope that you have taken my perspective into consideration. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0dfafcdff494,D69B5E55F39D,"Can you imagine in the future where you see floating cars and cars driving with no one in them? I can not, because I believe cars where a bad idea from the beginning. Why use cars for transportation when you have your own two feet? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+2d2e37f92cdc,D69B5E55F39D,Driverless cars are a bad idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+12ee29b89a68,D69B5E55F39D,they give human beings reasons to not get out of their house ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a28e885565e,D69B5E55F39D,they can cause accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0b06a501667e,D69B5E55F39D,the cost to make driverless cars will be too expensive. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6c441a58d3ad,D69B5E55F39D,"Driverless cars will make the human population obese and ignorant. It will cause people to not communicate with others. For example, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. By 2020, driverless cars will be the big hit and everybody will want one. They can pick up their kids from school; go get groceries whenever they need, so the parents will not have to walk around the grocery store for so long; eventually it will be able to anything you want it too. Without the daily driving and walking we do, the human race will soon become fat ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b31509d36655,D69B5E55F39D,What happens if a driverless car causes an accident? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+101d0a45ed7a,D69B5E55F39D,"If there are no humans in the car but your car is totaled, how will you change car information? How will you talk to the other person to see whos fault it is at? How would your car drive home if its been in an accident? Driverless cars can not do everything. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+66fa0a8f81a4,D69B5E55F39D,The cost to make driverless cars is going to expensive ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+740c021d1aca,D69B5E55F39D,"Where do you expect to get the money to make these cars? For example, they need a whole lot of sensors; cameras to watch that the driver is remaining focused; and the most important bit of technology in the driverless car is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car’s surroundings. All this fancy technology has to come out of someones pocket. Who's pocket do you think the goverment will take it out of? You are correct, the American's pockets. All our hard earned cash going to a car that we do not even need. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1b9c0cf733c,D69B5E55F39D,"Remember America, driverless cars are useless and not needed in the society we have today. Driverless cars are a bad idea because they give human beings reasons to not get out of their house, they can cause accidents, and the cost to make driverless cars will be too expensive. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12bef883ff5c,D69D856DF697,"I honestly think this is a waste of time. I mean  what the point of being a democate or a republican. Huh? We all live in the same county, so what's the point of seprating us. I would have been just fine if this article was about something else. I can careless about the government. The goverenment is very indiffernt and keeps lots of secrets from the citizens in this country. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+c10b1b8e61be,D69D856DF697,"I can sit here all day and tell you if i agree with this whole Electoral college, but it's irrelavant to me ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+0d0c777ad268,D69D856DF697,"I'm not saying that i hate this country, but there are alot of things that I disagree with. America can be very unfair. Yeah yeah, I know i don't live in the worst country ever, but I don't like this passage and I refuse the write an essay about it.
+
+The government don't care about people who are less fortunate. Because it takes to many sacfises to help others in need. The government is indiffernt in so many ways. America works and trade and nagotiate with countries that treat their people wrong.
+
+I may not know alot about the govornment and stuff but i still dislike this country.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b492c1f38b4b,D6B7EE7B040D,"Imagine for a minute that you are at school, on three hours of sleep with an innate ability to care for anything at this present time. You wish that you could just crawl back into your hovel and sleep for a few more hours. Despite your most earnest wishes, however, your required presence at school forbids such activities from transpiring. Luckily for you, there is yet a ray of hope. Some schools have begun to offer distance learning as a way for students to attend from home, usually via online means. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c247b38cd515,D6B7EE7B040D,I believe that students stand to gain from this alternate method of attendance. ,Position,Effective,,,
+8834f98bb865,D6B7EE7B040D,"distance learning decreases stress on students, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a71d458bba2f,D6B7EE7B040D,reduces bullying ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d7f74b3b69ee,D6B7EE7B040D,a healthy alternative for students with social anxiety. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+77471d9c1ab2,D6B7EE7B040D,"distance learning provides the student with an enhanced ability to pursue self-education. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+938c70cc41f0,D6B7EE7B040D,"This, consequentially, leads to a decrease in a student's mental and even physical health. This negative environment is usually achieved though an overabundance of homework and classwork, as well as assorted busy-work and tight deadlines. Through that invention which is distance learning, students will have an option to choose a slower-paced working environment. When working from a computer, classwork and homework lose distinction, and just become ""work,"" as there is no assigned place to start and finish it. This alone would do wonders for the mental health of students. To use an example from my own experiences with distance learning, I have found assignments done online to be more enjoyable and less stressful than those done in a classroom. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a09fbf3ce5e4,D6B7EE7B040D,"For the uninitiated, bullying is when one person engages in harmful acts repeatedly and over an extended period of time against another person. Schools have only served to increase instances of bullying through zero-tolerance policies, in which the victim is punished equally as much as the aggressor. This also leads to students being afraid to report bullying, as they would also risk punishment. Distance learning would reduce bullying by putting ""distance"" between a bully and a victim of bullying. While cyberbulling would still be present, as well as an issue, it is considerably less damaging when compared to the verbal and physical confrontations that can be seen on school grounds ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+036cc7561b2d,D6B7EE7B040D,"While most students can be considered to be outgoing in one way or another, there is a large minority of students that range from being just generally introverted to having crippling social anxiety. Their needs are usually overlooked in most schools, where the social climate in many cases is best described as ""riotous."" The prospect of attending classes from home for these students would be incredibly enticing, and would be calming for them. To use another personal example, I often find myself to be more productive at home than I do at school, in part because of the disruptive social climate that classrooms have. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6a159fe5814e,D6B7EE7B040D,"Self-education is, unsurprisingly, when a student independently seeks out and digests information, whether it is needed for school or not. Self-education can also have a profound effect on students, whether by giving them a higher grade on a test, or leading them to decide on a college major based off of a topic that they find to be interesting. To use myself an example, I have been educating myself on matters of Astronomy, Military History, and Geography for approximately 7 years now. In that time, I have participated in three state-level geography competitions, the second of which ranked me as third in the state in knowledge of Ancient Geography. In Astronomy, my self-education allowed me to get full marks on almost every Astronomy-related assignment in school, and in Military History, perhaps my strongest subject, I have connected myself with various historians and am currently making inroads into publishing work of my own design in a Military Journal. With distance learning, myself and every other like-minded student would have more time to pursue these subjects. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+522c55b5ec32,D6B7EE7B040D,"
+In conclusion, it is my belief that students would benefit immensely from distance learning. Working from home would take students out of a stressful school environment, and by extension protect them from bullying. That same home environment would also be better suited for more introverted students, who might feel anxious while being in school. Distance learning would also allow students to better pursue self-education, which would have positive effects for them presently and also later in life. Overall, distance learning stands to enrich the lives of students, while also serving to better their mental and physical health. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+994b7ac40405,D6D0E7AD9AC0,"Mr. Senator, the United States should keep the Electoral College process. ",Position,Effective,,,
+434eb3588c15,D6D0E7AD9AC0,This process makes sure that there will be a winner. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0bfcdc2ab1c6,D6D0E7AD9AC0,It also makes sure that a candidate doesn't have a regional appeal. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f8fc0527d87a,D6D0E7AD9AC0,The Electoral College process is certain that there will be a winner. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d777b8573843,D6D0E7AD9AC0,"There are 538 electors.
+
+A tie is possible just because 538 is an even number; most likely it will never happen. The big states get more electoral votes than the small states therefore if a presidential candidate gets the attention of most big states he has a higher chance of being elected. This process avoids run-off elections. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c32044f9488e,D6D0E7AD9AC0,The candidates have no regional appeal using this process. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+eac54ab8aa35,D6D0E7AD9AC0,"If a candidate has a regional appeal they are not likely to win. No region (South, North, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. For example Romney was in the South and the South has no incentive to campaign, so he gets no electoral votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b7ed612612ef,D6D0E7AD9AC0,"Despite the Electoral College having some problems, if we get a new process it will possibly have more problems and will be more difficult to control ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+851bfda894c6,D6E91124E3C1,"Community service is a very important thing to do. It is the act in which you are giving back to the community which houses you and your family. After all, if no one does community service, the whole town would be a mess. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0100da449b9f,D6E91124E3C1,So students should be required to complete a set amount of community service based on their capacity to be able to help. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e19760e23018,D6E91124E3C1,Many students who go to the elementary probably lives quite close to it. The majority most likely grew up in the same place that they live now. This would mean that they would have benefited off of the people in the past keeping the place clean ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e084c29aa198,D6E91124E3C1,It only makes sense for a receiver of free services to return the favour in one way or another. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c4dc278ff074,D6E91124E3C1,"When required to do community service, students can help pick up garbage or plant flowers to make the overall cleanliness of the community better. Students can also volunteer to help out with the school itself in thanks for the education received from going there for free. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b4c5333fb52f,D6E91124E3C1,Students will be able to show gratitude and improve the community through community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3c1a39526f10,D6E91124E3C1,Although most students may live close to the school some may live farther away and even out of the community itself. These students may not want to help out as they do not owe the community much but still attend the school. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+632452120460,D6E91124E3C1,They shouldn't have to help out the community because they aren't a part of it ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1c37cb9fe581,D6E91124E3C1,In addition some students may just not be able to comply from a physical injury or a disability that impedes them from helping out. They should be accounted for and excused from doing so. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2c07c5019226,D6E91124E3C1,"In most cases however, students should be able to do something even if it is small. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b912b221e7e7,D6E91124E3C1,Possibly helping an elderly person across a street or picking dropped things up for people. Community service should be a requirement to always help out whenever available to do so or when the student knows that they are capable of doing a larger task ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20377533e7ef,D6E91124E3C1,"In conclusion students should always be aware that they must help out the community but unless they are capable, in which they will be required to help, not have to do any difficult tasks and only small ones. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+406ac593738d,D7247C1BB949,I feel the elctoral college is overpowered and isnt neccsary ,Position,Effective,,,
+59d4d94d0581,D7247C1BB949,"Ifeel that the Electoral college is not a place its a process. The Founding fathers established it in the constitutional as a compromise between the election pf president by vote. See the elctoral college consists of 538 elctors. A majority of 270 elctoral votes is required.
+
+To Begin,Each canidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. these electors are generally chosen by the canidate's political, but as usaul state laws vary on how elcetors sare selected and what thier responsibilities are....
+
+See the presidential election is held every four years on the tueday after novemvber, but what people dont know when you vote for canidates you are actually voting for your canidate's elcetors.
+
+Most feel its ""winner takes-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidental canidate; but it's states like Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of ""proprtional representation."" After the presidential elction, your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment""  listing all of the canidates who ran for president in your state, as well as the names of their respective electors ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac0120415261,D7247C1BB949,"Under the electoral college system voters not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. the pickers of first place depends on the state, maybe even state conventions, all these things can help inprove the voting polls and make them quicker    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+df8fd1d907b0,D786FC589E93,Getting ride of the Electoral College would change so many things. We the people vote for who we want as a president. It should be that the person with the most votes wins. We the people should have a say in who runs our country. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+49bf2dc104ce,D786FC589E93,I mean we do because we get to vote and all but even if we do vote the Electoral College votes diffrently. Just becasue they and you are in higher power shouldnt mean that you get to pick everything that happends to this country. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+97a1376f79c7,D786FC589E93,"Yes, I understand that there are really stupid people in this world who make stupid dicisons ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+2d7b19e2991b,D786FC589E93,but we should at least get a vote on like new laws or building something new in town. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+a739e2fc9359,D786FC589E93,If we had votes on things like getting stuff torwn down and building new things it would change atol of places. But becauser of the Electoral College we dont have a final say in anything. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d6d55c4f3fa2,D786FC589E93,During the presidency electon one of the candidates will win by the votes of the people but lose beacuse the votes of the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb658549ee7d,D786FC589E93,"That is not right. When the people vote for something or someone they should be able to have a final say in what happends. Say your voting for a new ice cream flavor, well say there is 20 regular people voting and there is 5 from th e""electoral college"". Say 13 of you like the new flavor but the other 7 dont like it. Wouldnt you think the 13 should win? But the 5 electoral people still have to vote, and 3 of them vote against the new flavor so there is no new flavor. Wouldnt you be mad if you and the other 12 people who wanted the new flavor didnt win because of higher people above you said no? i know i would. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e934dba76b65,D786FC589E93,Im giving you all these reasons why the electoral college isnt fair because it needs to change.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+51e2f4d17300,D796242EFE4C,I think we should not keep the Electoral Collage and change to popular vote for the president of the U.S.A ,Position,Adequate,,,
+609bfec451af,D796242EFE4C,There are meny reasons im against the Electoral College one is that I want to vote for the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+daf09fd4f600,D796242EFE4C,"and im not alone over 60% of voters prefer a direct election instad of what we have now. Now here are the other reasons im against the Electoral College.
+
+Fisrt,in the story I read tittled ""The Indefensible Electoral College:Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wroung"" states that ""Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the ALF-CIO wanted to Abolish the Electoral College"". Those are only some of the people that want to get rid of the Electoral College.
+
+Thats why im with them against the
+
+Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a727cab9057a,D796242EFE4C,"Second,Over 60% of voters whould prerfer a direct election than the one we use now ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afe7924dbe30,D796242EFE4C,The reason I think they whould want a Direct Election is that they are the one who votes for who they what insted of the Electoral College voteing for the canadate that the most people wanted ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6fbf453d2de9,D796242EFE4C,Say if you wanted to vote for canadate A so you do but more people like canadate B insted so the Electoral College votes for canadate B and canadate B gets the points for your state. Thats the second reason I think we need to get rid of the Electoral College. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+413faf2475ee,D796242EFE4C,They're still people out their who think that we need to keep the Electoral College ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8064e2c2a2c4,D796242EFE4C,"and I cant change your mind but only tell you that there are things wroung with the Electoral College. One problem with it is that the electors can be anyonenot holding public office. Another problem with it is that each state only casts one vote, A single representative from Wyoming representing 500,000 voters whould have as much to say as the 55 representatives from Califorina who represent 35 million voters. Thats why I think we dont need the Electoral College. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9e0047a703bd,D796242EFE4C,"In conclusion,Thats why I think we need to get rid of the Electoral College and go to popular vote. Because of the meny people who want to get rid of the Electoral College I think its just a matter of time befor we dont have the Electoral College any more someday we will vote for the canadates we want insted of the Electoral College.       ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a426b33bca0f,D7C33D289E26,"Driverless cars. Sounds great right? Just a relaxing drive without rush, seems grand. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dbe6109b18fd,D7C33D289E26,"However to me, it doesn't seem rational. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+3a1070a771de,D7C33D289E26,"How does the idea of cars that are able to be used on it's own sound? As in the article, it states that driving laws want to keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. If we go ""smart"" everything will be technology based. Which is just one reason for an internet crash and more technical problems. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7449bb81ca7e,D7C33D289E26,"Driving without alert humans? How ""smart"" does that sound? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1db2382c7c74,D7C33D289E26,"I understand the idea, and to me it sounds cool ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5ca53b273697,D7C33D289E26,But are we going to risk several other problems to look cool? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c8fc36f91770,D7C33D289E26,Driverless cars would be tempting for drivers to not pay attention. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+abba3ba2f80c,D7C33D289E26,"If they don't pay attention, it could cause wrecks, accidental turns, who knows? You might end up at the wrong place. Lawmakers themself even agree that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Also, if we went driverless, it would give drunks an ""ok"" to drive because technically, they aren't driving.. which would cause a whole nother problem.
+
+If we went driverless, it would look cool for awhile, but eventually everything would crash. The cars might not be programmed correctly, people would put the blame on the car and not themself, it would cost us a tremendous amount of more money. From the actual car itself; to all the problems it would cause. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbead3d62e8c,D7C33D289E26,We would need to change all the roads and enable electrical cables. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6109c82ac89b,D7C33D289E26,"Requiring ""massive upgardes to existing roads, something that is simply to expensive to be practical."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+096a7e0c6599,D7C33D289E26,"The article states. If the google cars aren't truely driverless, people have to be alert in case of complicated traffic issues. Do you honestly think people would pay attention? Or will it become such a habit and easy to just sleep on the way to work at least one time. Should we take a risk to look cool and ""change the world?"" Or is it possible to improve technology in a differnet way that keeps drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe and happy. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1c7a57a32394,D7CF42E7FD3B,The electorial college should not be used because you dont exactly vote for the president. the electorial college is to voulintary for presidention voting ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3e99b67fd00c,D7CF42E7FD3B,3 reasons why the electorial college should not be used because you vote for a slate of electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68dfce6c3636,D7CF42E7FD3B,they would have the advantige in votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e760e4860fa7,D7CF42E7FD3B,it over rules the poeple vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc92d64468d9,D7CF42E7FD3B,One reason why this method should not be used becaus you vote for a slate of electors ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2ec8544bde6d,D7CF42E7FD3B,"instead of voting and using the poeoles vote, you vote for electors to elect for you. it comes from a variaty of places of whom is the electors. which lead to the biggest election crises odf 2000 ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a47a0ac3a681,D7CF42E7FD3B,Another reqason why this method should nt be used is because they would have a advantige in votes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9c4e65524de,D7CF42E7FD3B,Republicans would mostly build up the election group. which is over 300 polititions ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+657daf0d1991,D7CF42E7FD3B,one last reason is that it over rules the poeples vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c00dd3b0fbf9,D7CF42E7FD3B,if the poeple vote is up to 40% and the electorial vote is 60% it would over rule our vote. which leads to a obviouse winner in the election on the camopaighn run ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9840f2abd889,D7CF42E7FD3B,"the reason the elecctorial colllege should be banned is, you votefor a slate of electors, they would have the advantedg in the vote run, and it over rules the poeples vote.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eb0d5e98700a,D81428AC9545,I think that students shouldn't be required to do community service because there family might not have time or maybe there parents wont let them. ,Position,Effective,,,
+0e53172839f9,D81428AC9545,I think it would be nice for some children to help out but they shouldn't have to. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+82905c89ecbd,D81428AC9545,The children should not be responsible to take on actions on doing other peoples stuff because it might have not been them who either littered or did something that the person that did this action should be responsible for it. Children should only be required to do community service if they have served time in jail and is required by the law or they are doing it for a good cause like when they have to do it at there school so they are ready for college and have to learn what their life is going to be about ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51e65543adca,D81428AC9545,Taking time to do community kind of takes away being able to be a kid ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19e8ea96c510,D81428AC9545,"because you don't really get to hang out with friends and family , you don't get to have your own time and you might not have time to do your homework and that might cause you to have failing grades which even takes away more of your privilege's to hang out with friends or have your own time ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a863e25db0d8,D81428AC9545,so i think that being required to do community service shouldn't be allowed unless you have done something so that you have to do community service. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8554467b8ccc,D81428AC9545,All though community service looks good on your college application so children should try to participate with community service ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+57afda4f6685,D81428AC9545,but shouldn't be required at least you should wait until the kids are a senior in H.S. to start require community service. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+dfa06d5c30fb,D81FB980878F,"After reading this controversial essay on Electoral College and how it affects other and our ""American People"" I feel personally a bit ashamed at our own country that we allow all this nonsense to have happened. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d6d025aec2d2,D81FB980878F,"I would want too ban the choice of Electoral College, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+33e87435bf35,D81FB980878F,"because first off we're looking way too deep into our system of voting, is it really necessary too compare our states number of votes with another's just to possibly get noticed? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+643cc64a590e,D81FB980878F,Why dont we take things into our own hands and not count on voting for some stranger to do the work for us. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62b3fff812ab,D81FB980878F,"In one of they many paragraphs I had read, it simply stated ""The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that out to be (overruled)"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+952558a1e2a8,D81FB980878F,"that doesnt sound like everyone here in America is fully williing too agree to all of this, and I wouldn't blame them.  I don't understand why we cant just vote directly for the president ourselves! I mean after all, he is going too be our leader. I just would never put that type of a big decision in somebody else's hands who I don't even know at all, and especially if I know its not completely certain that whomever I had put my vote in for is at a 50/50 chance of winnning as it is. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67100e0bfe55,D81FB980878F,"If there is already an apparent list of five reasons all about retaining the Electoral College because of its democratic pedigree, just is another reason as too why I'm against this kind of voting system. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cce3ed64c44,D81FB980878F,"With having the first reason listed as being ""Certainty of Outcome"" should really make the person reading that question themselves on if they're making a right decision or not. You would have too go through a lot of trouble and paperwork as it is whenever voting for someone, At least I would like too know that I'm not basically giving my one vote away for technically someone else to do it for me.    ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f1bebb0ea7e2,D828BE60BE57,If they go by Electoral college then Congress would have to count up all the votes. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7899cab85cb1,D828BE60BE57,"The Electoral Cpllege has as many as 538 electors, 270 votes will determine who becomes our new president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+08f275c027cd,D828BE60BE57,On the other hand changing to election by popular vote for president will give people a chance to choose there favorite canidate to become the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+360b84a424d1,D828BE60BE57,Its basically like picking favorites you get to pick who you think is best and who you want to become the new president of whatever you the situation may be. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fae94834fce8,D828BE60BE57,Electoral College your not really voting for a president your votins for a slate of electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9163c5ba92f5,D828BE60BE57,Who really chooses the presidents ? That would be the electors who actually pick the president not the people. Mainly if you win the Electoral vote you still have to go through the popularity voting comes after that. Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate reciaves a mojority of the votes that are cast.    ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d762f4af69e1,D82CB7B7EC22,I don't think that the idea of a driverless car is a good idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8f9442917f05,D82CB7B7EC22,I feel as if driverless cars are just the fact of people being lazy ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5651170f1930,D82CB7B7EC22,"I don't understand what's hard about driving a car just for a short amount of time. Driverless cars might be a good idea for long road trips, but just think about how much work those cars would need if they broke down. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34c8fe9d5029,D82CB7B7EC22,On the positive side these driverless car might be a good idea for someone that's always is on the go & they get tired of driving. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2270618eca0a,D82CB7B7EC22,It may also be good for the mothers of young children. Only when the child is crying the can have the car driving it's self while they get the baby in order. They should really make that a feature of the car ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+415b4cb5f3f1,D82CB7B7EC22,Other than that the car seems worthless & is just another car problem that us Americans would have. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fd1f90ab1330,D82CB7B7EC22,Now having a driverless is just insane & lazy ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e086ce110808,D82CB7B7EC22,First off what is the point of having a car if it's just going to drive it's self? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ecd6e37facfc,D82CB7B7EC22,I think it would cause more accident & like the article said ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9f43163f816,D82CB7B7EC22,who's fault would it be the would the accident be on? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b0403afb5f12,D82CB7B7EC22,"Then insurance would be at an all time high, because the makers of these cars are going to find everyway to make these more advanced then the next, like I said in the first paragraph how much EXACTLY would it cost to buy A car like this or even fix a car like this ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b483b6ab6920,D82CB7B7EC22,Literally us as people only make enough to support our families & pay the bill. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72aa7be00b58,D82CB7B7EC22,Having to buy these cars would be another thing to break us. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+76a85c990377,D82CB7B7EC22,"To wrap things up, in my opinion i think this car is something that they should second guess. It might benefit some people & others it might put a steep hole in their pocket. Once again i feel as if there is no purpose of having a car if you're not going to drive it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8a14fc9d8110,D85B93C13556,I believe that if driverless cars became legal more accidents would occur and thousands of perople lose their jobs. ,Position,Effective,,,
+d208da5995e8,D85B93C13556,Driverless cars have almost every part of the car controlled by a computer. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6197ca87029b,D85B93C13556,"So, what happens if the car's computer lost power because it has been on to long, or it overheats because the computer is working to hard? In all these situations the car would most likely stop functioning correctly , and quite possibly hurt a pasenger. What if an essential part of the car breaks while on the road? The google car has a special piece of equipment called a LIDAR that keeps a constant 3-D model of the area around. If that piece of machinery fails while on the road the driver is required to take control of the car to keep it from driving into any people, buildings, or other cars. In all of the situations above the driver would need to take control of that unique situation, or else fatalities could occur. These are only a couple examples of what could happen if a driverless car malfunctioned while on the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d44cd08822ce,D85B93C13556,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming,"" it says that the current taxi system would be taken over by driverless cars. this would put hundreds of thousands of taxi and Uber drivers out of a job. There are also some jobs that cannot be replaced by driverless cars. A job like the trash collector would require the driver to get into the driveway, and get in the correct position to properly and safely collect the trash. Emergerency response vehicles like ambulances, police cars, and fire trucks would also need drivers to get them through traffic quickly, efficiantly, and safely. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0599a42d4fb7,D85B93C13556,These examples show that hundreds of thousands of people would lose their jobs if driverless cars were to take over. They also show that some jobs can not be completed without a driver behind the wheel. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8dd134966a21,D85B93C13556,"Since, driverless cars are driven by computers that means they are suseptable to hackers or other harmful people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d5ae75e3c06d,D85B93C13556,"If a driverless car has a computer that is connected to the internet hackers anywhere in the world could hack into the car's computer, and make it do whatever they want. There are also people who could damage the car physically by damaging essential external parts of the car. There are also unforseen events that could happen through nature. The car's camera or LIDAR could be covered up acciddently by a leaf or a bug. The car could hit a bad bump and jar the sytems computer. These are things that are possible in the realm of driverless cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+81248251daef,D85B93C13556,These reasons that I have stated show that there will always be a time when cars will need a driver to take control of a unique situation. Whether it be a faulty computer or broken camera, drivers will always be needed.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,
+e32543e5e4b1,D891B1BFC6F6,I think you should let us students to bring our cell phones to school ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1082154edf13,D891B1BFC6F6,we are in a growing society and we all need to communicate. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+27aba49fb476,D891B1BFC6F6,to begin with i consider all students must have a cell phone in order to text their class mate to ask about the home work from last night ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cccbb05476fb,D891B1BFC6F6,or just to have a briefly talk about the test in class that they are giving or just to let the students have more freedom. also texting is being more widely used than any other devise in earth like face book or twitter they are both being used to talk on the phones know every body has a phone i am right yes because technology has been growing rapidly and faster then ever know on days you don't see that device what was it called oh yea the beeper because it took so much time to call the one typing it in and for her to send the message to the other person beeper that has become obsolete. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0f532b6a305,D891B1BFC6F6,also phones have been one the worlds greatest inventions. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+09371e325546,D891B1BFC6F6,in fact the on who created the first phone was Alexander gram bell and know look at the phones they even have GPS. they can take you to their destination with out problem is like the sexton that used triangulation to find your position in earth. but know they use seven GPS to know where you are and were are you going now they are more accurate they take anywhere any time any place. phones have develop allot know there even a hand free devise that you use that is not even a cord is just dangling from your ear and it its totally cool to have one i have one. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+626819ae19d2,D891B1BFC6F6,so please principal with your rat honor please allowed phones for us to call each other. also hanks for taking your time and reading this thank you allot i hope you take my opinion in consideration ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c356f0431074,D8D90E042134,I think that students should decide on their own ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4320ccc8c218,D8D90E042134,"I mean if they're eight-graders, they should be smart enough and decide on their own on what they want, or don't want to do ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1fff89aa396,D8D90E042134,"For me, I would choose helping the community, 'cause if you think about it, your actually doing it for your own goods, maybe in some points your not, but most of them from peoples personal experiment's basically, your doing it for your community and your country, the world and people that are around you ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f107d0397607,D8D90E042134,"What i would do, I would make a list from easiest, to hardest on helping the community, and start from the easiest because at first, your not used to it, and you need to learn how to be responsible for your things, and for what you do ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+19aa90ac82be,D8D90E042134,"For example, I'll pick, helping students in your classrooms. Then, I might start tutoring my cousins or neighbors, something to start of with, like a practice. If I'll see or think that I'm good enough, I might move on, tutoring Elementary kids. Later on, I'll be a famous tutor! If I'll be doing a good job at tutoring, I might starting subbing for teachers, then they'll ask me to be a teacher! Which means, that now I'll have a job! So basically, I made my own personal carrier just for helping the community! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+223ab0296a3b,D8D90E042134,helping you community isn't as bad ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5953fddf87d5,D8EAAA9AB53B,""" I only love my bed and my momma, I'm sorry,"" is a song lyric from famous R&B artist, Drake. This quote may pertain to one, considering many people love the comfort of their own space and bed. One can shop, watch concerts, get food, and more through electronics. So then rises the question: why not attend classes through these same devices? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+c835fe3eabee,D8EAAA9AB53B,Students would benefit from being able to take classes from home by way of online or video conferencing ,Position,Effective,,,
+355f9a25b59f,D8EAAA9AB53B,"students will not have to worry about discrimination of any kind, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+750d560d3ee0,D8EAAA9AB53B,have more control over their learning ,Claim,Effective,,,
+063fd34b3e1c,D8EAAA9AB53B,"be able to decide the timing in which they learn. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+63f2862f9ae8,D8EAAA9AB53B,"The school setting is one of the main grounds for bullying; consequently, this affects one's ability to focus and learn. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8cdc091b4d51,D8EAAA9AB53B,"This effect is not a problem at home, because one does not have to fear getting talked about by fellow students in the classroom. In the isolation of one's home, nobody sees them, what they have on, how their hair looks, etc. For example, one could have half of their hair undone, and not have to worry about what the next person has to say about it. This online replacement, in fact, completely eliminates the need to get ready and look the utmost best to try to avoid stares and whispers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a14e19a6d618,D8EAAA9AB53B,"Another example is that a friend has not only told me, but I have witnessed how much online schooling has benefited her for the better. She is not as self conscious as she used to be, due to the fact that, she has gotten very used to being comfortable in her own skin and not having to listen to other people's opinions. In school, she was a C, and occasionally a D, student because she was always leaving class to go speak with counselors about how people would make jokes about her and throw items at her, because she looked different and was Arabian. Since she switched to online schooling, she is now an A and B student. Furthermore, she is about to graduate and get her diploma with a 3.0 GPA. If she did not switch to online schooling, would she be in this situation now? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a8e947d3dcdf,D8EAAA9AB53B,"People have different ways of learning and getting information into their head. With classes online, one has more control over their learning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d8fbe6b5e1b5,D8EAAA9AB53B,"Studies show that majority of humans have three different ways of learning: audio, visual, and more proactive. With the web, people can simply listen to the lesson, watch it, or write things down and create models in home for a more interactive experience. In addition, taking notes is easier with this strand of learning. One is able to focus, without distractions in a classroom setting. For example, other students being obsessively loud, to the point where, one cannot hear the teacher or be able to do the assignment properly. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9b02fd0327e1,D8EAAA9AB53B,"Also, students tend to move at many different paces when trying to learn; therefore, online classes can support this. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f01ed3439f64,D8EAAA9AB53B,"One can go through the lesson at their own pace; being able to move forward or go back to certain information, if they move a little slower or faster than the average. People could have slightly different learning abilities, and need certain resources. For example, someone may need a dictionary to understand. However, with electronic learning, these resources are right at your fingertips. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0c82ce2fde3e,D8EAAA9AB53B,"
+Online schooling and video conferencing is just another way or learning that is more flexible, due to the fact that, one is in their home. Students would definitely benefit from being able to attend classes from home because one is able to avoid discrimination from fellow students, approach the way of their learning, and control the timing of their learning. At the end of the day, why move from the comfort of the home and bedroom, especially when there's better benefits if one stays? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7ea74cb8d64c,D8ED809B7F92,I feel as if you should keep the Electoral College as it is. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb55e61051b6,D8ED809B7F92,Our country is so messed up that we have a lot of our people not working or just getting well-fair. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a3a636874ae8,D8ED809B7F92,"To be honest, that isnt fair that they get a vote. Who are they going to choose when it comes to voting? Someone trying to help us move forward or someone making our tax money got to the people who dont want to get off there lazy butt and do something. I do not know 100% of the facts on who can vote or not, but if a bum sitting on state road 70 all day begging for money just so he can go buy beer, seems unfair that he should even get a vote. In my opinion half of the population will end up voting for someone because, of what bad benefits he is offering and then we will be stuck with another bad president for another 4 years! Who knows more about congress then our congress? Lets be a honest here, do we really want all our tax money going to families with 8 kids and cant afford 2 or the bums on the side of the road begging for money or the trashy people hitting up crack ever time they get a little bit of money? Not me! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+05d6a156a991,D8ED809B7F92,The article states that yes the electors may choose differently from what the people and the popularity wanted. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c4d391e5af25,D8ED809B7F92,"I dont think that matters because why would they vote for someone who isnt fit to be president? If they are even up there, they are fit. So I think the Electoral College is just fine of a process to use for the United States of America. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a677867502e0,D8ED809B7F92,"Yes, maybe our electors dont see certain benefits one canidate might be offering or doesnt understand as to why one might be better in your eyes. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+aa5dc775af9c,D8ED809B7F92,"But in the end, the president we choose is probably not even going to actually do half the things he promised so who cares? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fc99fa9fe84b,D8ED809B7F92,If we want this country to go anywere we need to let the people who actually understand what the men up on the campains telling the people of america a bunch of lies really offer us. They know whats good for us and thats why they are voting for them. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+623c1b587170,D8F3209E84CF,"In the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming,"" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of cars that drive themselves. Although, there are bountieous reasons why driverless cars are a good thing, there are also myriads of reasons as of why this could also be a bad thing. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a1d3ce9dc8b8,D8F3209E84CF,From upgrading roads ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c8f7a972b5f2,D8F3209E84CF,"the invasion of privacy, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+caad75a0c771,D8F3209E84CF,"driverless cars are not looking too good for the future. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+db9d9ddf9910,D8F3209E84CF,"The article mentioned ""many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7a9890b7893b,D8F3209E84CF,"What that piece is stating is in order to have smart cars or driverless cars the U.S will require ""massive upgrades,"" hence the mention of smart roads. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0601ee04be52,D8F3209E84CF,"The roads will need to have built in radio signals to send messages, in binary code, to the car, to alert the car of road conditions or any problems. In response to knowing this the author states that this was ""simply too expensive to be pratical."" So now that smart roads are out of the question, it is up to technology to teach the car human skills. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+bfdd3d83dd32,D8F3209E84CF,"Technology is being used to help the cars ""mimic the skill of a human at the wheel,"" as the article states. It has the proper sensors, but sensors alone could not possibly be enough. According to the article the cars are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills. Everything about driving a car on the road is a human skill, not to mention technology is known to have loop holes and gaps hidden throughout it. Statistics most likely shows that there are many ways to hack into the technology and change how a company programs their product to work. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b2cb6d5082cd,D8F3209E84CF,"If it is not being hacked into, technology and the internet is also known to malfunction often, which could lead to innumerable amounts of incidents. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+5680b7d29e2a,D8F3209E84CF,Another concern with driverless cars is invasion of privacy ,Claim,Effective,,,
+36797dd45c4b,D8F3209E84CF,". The article mentions that while the driver watches the road, the car will be watching the driver. An issue with that would be that if the footage gets out and private information is shown in the footage will the company be held responsible. This could cause issues as identity theft and more to rise. Wanting to be sure that drivers are focusing on the road is one thing, but if it causes a stir with privacy that could potentionally be bad for the car companies and the people in charge. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d1c47aa5c15d,D8F3209E84CF,My position of driverless cars is no technology could drive a car better than humans. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+be6022cb772f,D8F3209E84CF,"Driving is a human activity, it started with humans and should end the same way. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa0d959213a1,D8F3209E84CF,"I do agree the world would use less gas, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+0738ef141be7,D8F3209E84CF,but I don't believe it is quite as safe as it seems. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+80520116d06c,D8F3209E84CF,"There are countries and people who are already in debt, we should be trying to help them out before we try to spend billions on smart roads. We also can not just rely on technology to keep us safe, there are already an aboundant amount of technology malfunctions going on, adding this to the equation would not help. Lastly, one that will probably have more of a concern with everyone would be privacy, I do not believe most people would feel safe knowing they are being watched as they are driving, and knowing that fact could even possibly make them unfocused. Driverless cars was a good idea, but I personally do not believe that anyone is ready for them. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+305543b2b10d,D8F89BE1861C,Helping in community service is way to encourage students to help out a lot more and keep students out of trouble. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+86f285374f55,D8F89BE1861C,Doing community service shows that kids actually do care about their town and the environment they live in. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ee07739a7456,D8F89BE1861C,"For example if you live by a beach, and there is a lot of garbage, and no one helps pick it up, it can kill the poor harmless animals that might think its food. But if you have all the students help by doing community service it will all get cleaned and we can make sure there are no pieces left behind. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e98f7866e986,D8F89BE1861C,"If you have all the kids help, maybe we can have an ice-cream day to repay us for all the hard work, so that everyone gets something good out of volunteering to community service. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9b013a31b9f9,D8F89BE1861C,"I myself do not like to clean anything, but i think community service would be a really good thing for some kids ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+035ba85b279e,D8F89BE1861C,"And it's not only cleaning trash off the ground but also helping at the elderly home or tutoring kids at an elementary school, like reading books, or help planting trees around their school grounds ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0eb44bc1eeea,D8F89BE1861C,There is a wide variety of things to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a0bf05e01c4d,D8F89BE1861C,"If you don't want to make all the kids in the school do community service, then i think you should put up a sign up sheet for students who want to so they can sign up, and have a day or two every week were they leave school for a couple hours to go do some community service with some teachers that volunteers also. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cc562721fcd4,D8F89BE1861C,"i think kids that get into fights or start trouble with teachers or their peers, should have to go without a doubt so they can learn a few things about being a bully. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c39803c278b7,D8F89BE1861C,Volunteering in community service is a great way to keep students out of trouble. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4aaf1ab8a5fa,D8F89BE1861C,"Volunteering in community service looks really good on a record, and usually when you apply for a job there is a section that ask for volunteer work, so it could also help some kids get better jobs. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+43b2eb2f88a0,D91B2369C76D,"I would like to say that doing community service is a good thing, but i do not think you should require the whole school to do it. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+eac3b9106647,D91B2369C76D,"Reason are that because some student may not have time to do it student may plan out of town trips with family, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+73ba9e5caeeb,D91B2369C76D,I believe that you should let students have a choice in what they do. Some students may not have rides to go to the community service areas. If you really want us you to do community services you should make a club in the school and those student who joins are really going to be the ones that commits to helping the community. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+da36607b0056,D91B2369C76D,Reasons why i think you shouldn't require community service because some of us really just want to sleep in the mornings and hang out with friends in the evening we really don't get that in school ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+81875523b40c,D91B2369C76D,We should not be punished because we don't have the time to help the community. Most student would like too help the community you should look out for those types and ask them and not require the whole school that would be a little too much for some students. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c37bfb459acd,D91B2369C76D,In conclusion i believe that you as the principle should hold a school wide meeting discussing about helping the community and making a community service club and those that want to join are the one that will do the community service ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+040a80af34f2,D93BADC352CF,Many kids all over the country talk on cell phones. We use them to communicate with one another. We also use cell phones for emergencies. For example if are out with your friends and you need to talk with one of your parents what do u do? You call them or text them. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1b95b7ebafa0,D93BADC352CF,All though you can use them for urgent cares ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ea3b686eefae,D93BADC352CF,students at school and adults at work can get distracted bye a cell phone. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a656e690729b,D93BADC352CF,"Policy one states, students are allowed to bring cell phones to school and only use them during lunch and passing period but phones have to be turned off during class time. Policy two states, students are not allowed to have cell phones at all ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+26bfaaf61e31,D93BADC352CF,Policy two is a better choice ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7f467f29dfb0,D93BADC352CF,because have a cell phone can be extremely distracting to students and maybe even teachers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2451dbfbeb12,D93BADC352CF,School is a department of education to learn new things and life long skills. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a6887cd9fb2,D93BADC352CF,Students also might get hurt texting on a phone ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+924395285699,D93BADC352CF,they will be to busy to pay attention to a flight of stairs two steps away. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a57becfb527b,D93BADC352CF,If you decide policy one you might have complaints about cell phones ringing during the middle of class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d0d59e8efca0,D93BADC352CF,which does not just alarm the owner but also the rest of the class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d09970e13bdd,D93BADC352CF,By picking policy two you have eliminated the disruption for students and have made it easer for students to learn as much as possible. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e4b8b8134c22,D9436DDEB3C4,"I believe that we should change the system to ""election by popular vote"". If we were to change the way we elect our president im sure citizens would be more pleased with the over all outcome. People vote on who they think is best fit to represent them and give them the best over all outcome. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3f9c40622f69,D9436DDEB3C4,"When using the ""electoral college"" you are not voting for the president but you are voting for a state of electors. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1a8402aec4e3,D9436DDEB3C4,"It would be easier to simply allow presidents to get the popular vote in order to make the election more fair all around. The ""electoral college"" is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+01664bab968a,D9436DDEB3C4,"It is time to change our voting methods because the ""electoral college"" system is outdated, irrational, and unfair to citizens ",Position,Effective,,,
+54d119d72c75,D9436DDEB3C4,"When people place their vote they belive they are putting in a vote for the president they choose, not for a slate of electors. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c951d34b0833,D9436DDEB3C4,"The ""electoral college"" is a very non-democratic way of selecting your president. In a way the government is deceiving their citizens by the way our voting method is set up. When people vote they feel a sense of independence because they are allowed to choose who they would like to represent them in congress. But instead once they place their vote it goes to electors rather than a simple vote towards the one they selected. If you were to change the way people's votes were counted it would be easier and faster to elect a president and get him into office to fix world-wide problems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5eecf2744d26,D9436DDEB3C4,"
+In all three articles at least one section has made it clear on their opinion to abolish the electoral college. Figures such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and even the U.S. Chamber of Commerce have agreed on abolishing the electoral college ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bc8b91b4720f,D9436DDEB3C4,"When voting for president you are voting for a slate of electors, but do we even know who these supposed electors are! Are votes are being manipulated and we are not even aware of who is doing it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cbc398575466,D9436DDEB3C4,If we can not vote for are president without going through electors we should be able to vote for the electors who are voting for are president. It is only fair that we have some say in everything that is going on. When votes are being placed we should be informed of all that is going on. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5497d0958dc1,D9436DDEB3C4,"If you were to vote for your favorite tv show but your vote had to go through twenty different people all with different opinions you would be frustrated. Now imagine that scenario but with something extremely more significant than a televison show, the president. You are trusting possibly the next four years of your life with strangers in which you have never heard of before. It would only be fair if we could simply change the system to popular vote rather than electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+efa4aac6ef9d,D9436DDEB3C4,If you switch to popular vote more people would be more likely to vote because they could have more confidence about their vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5cd763a9313b,D9436DDEB3C4,They would feel free to make their own decision and trust it would not be tampered with by a stranger. People deserve a fair vote and with the popular vote that is what you are giving them. Because every living being deserves equality. Changing the system would not only be helpful for citizens but helpful for the congress. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bdb045ef37a,D9436DDEB3C4,Instead of having random members of congress choose the president they can work on serious issues around the world. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4e9bf69c6f16,D9436DDEB3C4,They can stop worrying about foolishness and do their jobs. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+969bf5ba5586,D9436DDEB3C4,In conclusion changing the way people vote is easier for everybody. It saves time for electors and it gives people a chance to see who they are really voting for. Presidents would have to go to each state and appeal to them in order to get a vote. I belive that is what we need. They would be required to actually work for a position in office rather than speaking on whjat they are going to do and paying someone else to elect them. We should have faith in our president and know who we are voting for before we cast our vote. This system seems more fair and more modern to the twenty first century. This is a system most Americans would agree with. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+172f97b897f7,D962FD67FF4C,Some people think aliens are not real and some people think aliens are real. The Face on Mars changed after different amount of years. We don't know how it changed and we probably will never know. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0ce575a65beb,D962FD67FF4C,"When the camera took the picture, the shadow of either the camera, or something else, made the Face look like a face. The shadow make the rock look like it has eyes, nose, and a mouth. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3103af419d09,D962FD67FF4C,"No one knows how the face changes, maybe it's aliens, maybe it's natrual to change, maybe it's getting older. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a3a5d3f71809,D962FD67FF4C,But every famous attractions change. So the rock could be a natural landform. We don't know why it changes. It's a mystery. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68f374ec212b,D962FD67FF4C,"If aliens were real, then people would think aliens made everything in space and will come to earth to attack and kill us. Aliens are just a myth. People just belive evrything, and/or watch too much TV shows about aliens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5095ca48b54,D962FD67FF4C,Aliens are not real ans the Face is just a natural landform. The Face just changes overtime. Maybe the Face looks like a face now. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bfe589a4116b,D972C6918584,"Tick tock what is that noise, that is the sound of the clocks going off to switch classes and the time for all cell phones to start going off. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+201c99efa892,D972C6918584,"I believe that all cell phones should be aloud at school for many reasons, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ce48efb97f1d,D972C6918584,what if someone had an emergency out of the classroom or in the bathroom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ee1ab861ec7b,D972C6918584,you would obviously need a phone or something for them to call for help ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4c0752d54b84,D972C6918584,"some students might go home with friends or go home by themselves, ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+103e163a2fc3,D972C6918584,all parents need to get in touch with their children to make sure they made it home safe! ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81c68ae0b97b,D972C6918584,Students get there phones taking up so much during school because they either get a phone call or a text message during class because they forget to turn their phones off or they just leave them on vibrate and that is not allowed. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bf25f7eda4b,D972C6918584,I think if they made a phone policy to use them only for emergency's or specific purposes then we would probably not have as big of problems as we have been having. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a14fdd9583a5,D972C6918584,"I agree with policy 1 that they should allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as their turned off during class time ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a73f5c7ac061,D972C6918584,I think if every student in middle school wrote a paper to a principal saying they would only use their cell phone's for emergency's only then I believe that they might would allow them to stay on and stay with them at school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d63c7d945a13,D972C6918584,I hope that each principal at each middle school will get this letter and look back and think that if each student listens to this and follows these proper directions and don't use there phones during class then they might make this a rule to have cell phone's back! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+22f6419d5d55,D97A2C636D38,When you think of the USA  the first word that you think of is freedom or a word along those terms. I would have to agree with you we are a very free and fair country for...most things like voting ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+87229e9db31e,D97A2C636D38,"I would have to say that the Electoral Collage is the one unfair thing we have and their are many reasons why we should replace the Electoral Collage with popular vote. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+b7e4786bd4fd,D97A2C636D38,"The Electoral Collage is when voting for the president, instead of dierectly voting you have electors represnt your state during elections. The Electoral Collage is made up of 538 electors, you have one elector for every member of the Congressional deleagtion and House of Representives plus two for the Sentors this is per state then they all come together to represnt during the election of the president. This is how the Electoral Collage is set up ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2d4a0ba8affb,D97A2C636D38,"it all seems fair but you, yourself arent having a fair chance to vote for who you want as the president, its like haveing someone make your dessions for you its just unfair. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+447691c0168c,D97A2C636D38,"The Electoral Collage is set up so the electors vote for who they want to win surely one of your electors will vote for who you want  but its not enough you basically have no voice during elections. Bradford Plumers The Indefsible Electoral Collage he says ""At the most basic level, the electoral collage is unfair to voters, because of the winner take all system in each state"" he then says "" The candidates only spend time in the swing states where they know they have a chance of winning""; he is pointing out that those who are running for president spend a mojortity of their time in the states where they can get the most amount of votes for example they might campain to Florida or Washington DC but not even go to a state like Wyoming or Idoh. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a6b995c68b2,D97A2C636D38,"I think we should have the popular vote because it goves everyone a chance to vote for the president, they can voice their opions out loud and have a chance at seeing who they want in office. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d40ddfb7b16,D97A2C636D38,"Another reason the Electoral Collage is unfair is because the electors might all be Republican or all Democrat but we as voters dont get a chance to pick what party we stand for, with popular vote you have a chance to say who you want and what party you represent weather its Republican, Democrat or Induvial you at least get the chance and even though its only a 25 percent  chance who you vote for is going to win at least its still a chance. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c88c26ddae17,D97A2C636D38,"Popular vote has its many advantges but one of the best is you can ""get to know"" who your voting for the canidates can come to your state and make speechs, have posters something to tell you what they are planning on doing if they get elected, this gives every state a fair chance to see who they are voting for. And yes they might spend a longer time in New york then Ohio but at least their spending time and educating the people on what they want to do and why the people should vote for them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed8f83304437,D97A2C636D38,"In Richard A Posners In Defense of the Electoral Collage he states that the Electoral Collage is good because of the "" swing states"" wich he then says "" The voters in toss-up states are more likely to be the most thoughtful voters because they know they are going to decide the election"" in saying this he means that people who live in swing states will be more careful and more thought out on who they want to vote for. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+ec4971df6ba5,D97A2C636D38,"Yes this might be true but what about all the non swing states like for example Texas they could have been careful while voting but Florida was not, then you have Ohio and New Mexico who could have been careful to but compared to Florida their votes get lost even though they were more careful and thoughtout. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+b639694768df,D97A2C636D38,So as you can see popular vote is more fair and also a smarter method of things it gives the peoplle a fair chance to vote for who they want while also allowing them to voice thier thoughts.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d8f29bc4f9cd,D9900BD19D55,"I bet your wondering what a Electoral college is in your head ,
+
+well an Electoral college is not somewhere you go to like a regular college but its a process ,
+
+they established it in constitution as a compromise.
+
+Its where they vote for presidents and vice president including the electoral votes by congress ,
+
+Electoral college consists 538 electors and the majority of 270 electoral votes to elect the president 
+",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+44cd45810feb,D9900BD19D55,"To begin with, every candidate is running for President for your state ,and each of them has their own electors .
+
+After every four years presidential election is held on tuesday after the first monday ,
+
+the fun part is that most states gets a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards all the electors to the winning presidential candidate ,
+
+also your governer prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment""
+
+listing all the wonderful candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors .
+
+This year most voters are expecting another close election in the population vote which winners could again lose the presidency.
+
+Under electoral college system some voters don't vote for presidents but vote for a state of electors , if you lived in texas for an example and wanted to vote for someone named John kerry you would vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry .
+
+For the winner-take-all method of the award electoral votes induces the candidates just like in 2012 election .Obama won the vote and got 29 electoral votes ,a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in the campaign
+
+Nixton in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had a 43 pecent plurality of popular votes ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+56aa61eccf15,D9900BD19D55,"But hopefully you learned about the Electoral College and what it really is  ,and what the electors have to go through to be president. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+20b0921b5e79,D9B5F55E6705,"To keep the Electoral College, or to switch to election by popular vote for the President of the United States, ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+7c5a73919199,D9B5F55E6705,"anyone can see the right answer is to keep the Electoral College, despite it not being the most democratic choice around. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b5d832d73f16,D9B5F55E6705,"Many see it as being a waste of time, seeing as how they truly can't vote for the President they want. Yet most still can't see that the Electoral College is not the most easiest thing to get rid of. It has been with them ever since their Founding Fathers established it along with the Constitution. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+623958f10f02,D9B5F55E6705,"Keeping the Electoral Colllege is best for the US, even if it isn't that fair to the people. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a644452105d6,D9B5F55E6705,"But first, what is the Electoral College anyways? Well, the Electoral College is not an actual college, its actually a process. The Founding Fathers made it as ""a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress, and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens"", as stated in paragraph one of the article, lines 3-6. A somewhat tedious task to get voted for a whole entire country, but it gets the job done. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f94e8f614fd,D9B5F55E6705,"The Electoral College system has been reported as ""unfair, outdated, and irrational."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c09e920ecc9,D9B5F55E6705,"Most of what that statement does say is true, it is pretty unfair to the people who want to vote for their president, it's extremely outdated and needs an update fast, and its pretty irrational at times. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+681f9a3b20d2,D9B5F55E6705,"Yet does that mean it can be bad? No, not really. As stated in paragraph 16, lines 1-3; ""Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)"". ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+43c75623da58,D9B5F55E6705,"The statment means that basically each slate chooses some electors that go with the popular vote, and they are shipped off to go and submit the votes and the electoral votes, where the task they are given is rarely betrayed, or not done. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+174e56ab3669,D9B5F55E6705,"Yet, the word 'rarely' still sticks, and not many can just simply deny that it is not there. The rest of the statment in paragraph 16 continues onto lines 4-6, ""[;however,] it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote."" So in simple terms, you can get the electoral vote which can put you ahead, but you won't win with just that under your belt. The people still matter, and their vote can still count against you. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+33805601e93f,D9B5F55E6705,"""Why should we keep the Electoral College."" There are easily 5 reasons for retaining it. The 5 reason why we should keep it, are as follows:
+
+1)Certainty of Outcome; certainty of outcome basically states that anything can happen, but anything bad won't neccesarily always happen. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca8aaede3e2a,D9B5F55E6705,"Let's take paragraph 18 for example, which talks about this reason. It states in lines 16-19, ""A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538- is an even number, but is highly unlikely..."" Anything can happen, even a tie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67f88039a927,D9B5F55E6705,"Everyone's President is as it states. The President is everyone's , not just the people in the south, north, or anywhere in the United States. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+dfeca7e5ca06,D9B5F55E6705,"If anyone just simply appealed to a certain region in the US, the other regions would feel as if ""the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president"" (paragraph 19, last line). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+94bb121761c7,D9B5F55E6705,"Swing States, the main practice of the Electoral College. The higher the state has with electoral votes, the more likely the canidate will be able to win. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6efb785943fc,D9B5F55E6705,"""Voters in toss-up states are more likely to play close attention to the campaign-to really listen to the competing canidates-knowing that they going to decide the election"" (paragraph 20, lines 4-8). This means that they will not be easily be persuaded. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+303f4986444f,D9B5F55E6705,"Big States, as some can guess from the phrase, 'Bigger is better', that phrase truly shines here. the bigger states, such as California or Texas, have higher electoral votes than some of the smaller states, such as New Jersey or Rhode Island. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5575269403a0,D9B5F55E6705,"""So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does..."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cfbde6caadba,D9B5F55E6705,"Avoid Run-off Elections, where ""The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidates receives a majority of the votes cast."" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f82d5964d1f3,D9B5F55E6705,That means that the Electoral College tries to make sure that their is no tie. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91314e252fd5,D9B5F55E6705,"
+Those are the reasons why the Electoral College should not be abolished. Surely someone can put up a counter argument to make this small article to shame, but in the end its truly all of the matter of opinions, where no ones is truly ""the best"" or ""true"". This is simply the opinion of many in the US. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12e570e7c9d0,D9B85CAE8834,"Should the Electoral College be kept in favor? The electoral college does avoid the problem of elections. Well on the other hand, Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole agreed to abolish the elctoral college and change to election by popular vote for the president of the U.S. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+4a29ffe1df1b,D9B85CAE8834,It is unfair to the voters because the electors elect the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8734eb456cf3,D9B85CAE8834,"not only are the voters voting for electors,they are voting for the canidate's electors when they think they're voting for the canidate. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8011e31cf7d5,D9B85CAE8834,Choosing a president should be elected by the popular vote of people not electors. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ffdf9a07ad41,D9B85CAE8834,"To start with,the president of the United States should be elected by the popular vote of the people. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3143dcbc946d,D9B85CAE8834,"The president is there to guide and lead the people. The citizens of the U.S should have the right to vote for who they think should be president. For instance,some residents have a feeling that their votes don't count. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+98fd27c1996f,D9B85CAE8834,"To add,it is unfair to the voters because the elctors elect the the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+28e3707359f7,D9B85CAE8834,"Eventhough the electors represent your state,they don't let the people choos who they desire for president. When voting for president, it shouldn't be all about the electors. The Electoral College even has the possibility of turning voters away that voted for a canidate that has no hope for supporting their state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+025e28517ad8,D9B85CAE8834,the electoral college does avoid problems. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e6fb947b4496,D9B85CAE8834,"Meaning,a canidate cannot receives a certain amount of the votes cast. For instance, when a canidate has more votes than other canidates while not receiving a clear majority oof votes. Also in big states ""the Electoral College rebuild some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senat decreed in the constitution.""[Richard Posner {21}]    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e73f5227abcc,D9BB6C11F6E3,I think community service is important. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38c4b2ca5982,D9BB6C11F6E3,You can help pick up trash or recycle and help the community. Or if the students like kids they can go to the daycare to take care of them. Some people want to be a nurse they can volunteer in the hospital. Some people are interested in science they can volunteer in a history or a science museum. A lot of people I see volunteering is a museum are more of senior citizens. Sometimes when they talk you can't hear them correctly. Maybe putting students in the museum will help and themselves can also visit the museum and learn more about history and science. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c5055722afe,D9BB6C11F6E3,A big part of doing community service is that you gain different experiences from different work. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0f071fddb43f,D9BB6C11F6E3,When you are applying for a job they will likely to have someone that have the experience of doing that. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+035d24fdafb2,D9BB6C11F6E3,Some people do community service for school credits. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bdb6c4345878,D9BB6C11F6E3,So I think community service is important and required for the students.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+268a7d2e671c,DA0ADB14BDB5,"The Electoral College is a ""process"" ""between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens"" (1). The Electoral Collage was created by the founding fathers and was written in the Constitution ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+025cf0956681,DA0ADB14BDB5,The Electoral Collage should be kept instead of popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+26674d3d385c,DA0ADB14BDB5,the Electoral Collage is easier to decide who becomes President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c8f2558f73e7,DA0ADB14BDB5,it is chosen by a better educated person. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8fc039f065b8,DA0ADB14BDB5,"To start, the Electoral Collage helps in deciding who is gonna be the President ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa3655322ba8,DA0ADB14BDB5,"  ""Certainity of outcome, everyones President, swing states, big states, and avoid run-off elections"" (Posner). The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral Collage invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote"" (18). ""This is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president"" (19). ""...the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election"" (20). ""So, other things being equal , a large state gets more attention from presidental candidates in a campaign than a small state does..."" (21). ""The Electoral Collage avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast"" (22). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fde4d1b19bb7,DA0ADB14BDB5,"Secondly, when voting for Electoral Collage ""you are actually voting for your candidate's electors"" ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2f94f6425d24,DA0ADB14BDB5,"""Each candidate running for President is your state has his or her own group of electors"" (5). ""The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are..."" (5). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+01a4abffaa08,DA0ADB14BDB5,"Although the Electoral Collage sounds simple, there are some problems that occur. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1eef016202ad,DA0ADB14BDB5,"According to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral collage-- won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now"" (9). ""Under the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president"" (10). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53b0431afc8f,DA0ADB14BDB5,"To conclude, the Electoral Collage is easier to decide who is becomes the President and it is chosen by a better educated person. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0afab95bfe17,DA228B928B61,Would students benefit from taking classes home? Some would agree and disagree. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+01c4190b5325,DA228B928B61,Taking classes online would help students who need that one on one teaching ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ed66e5cc5aa8,DA228B928B61,Some students have a hard time focusing in a noisy environment because other students are disturbing the class whiles they are trying to pay attention. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ad0860018e1,DA228B928B61,"Students who aren't comfortable in a noisy environment cant express themselves in class,but if you take classes online you get to express yourself for example video confrence you get to express yourself and ask good question with good explanation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+175e034a3205,DA228B928B61,"Because everybody has a way of learning some students adapt quick and others learn slowly,but taking this one on one course helps you adapt really quick because you are alone in a quite environment which is going to help you adapt really quick! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f89a6a8933a9,DA228B928B61,"Online classes also helps because some students have a hard time waking up early in the morning to school which causes you to be late everytime,being late can lead you to detention,saturday school and other things. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a775e47bf70e,DA228B928B61,But with this online course you can take it anytime during the day. Mainly my point is online classes are very helpful and it helps students to concentrate more. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a84fa9d7a606,DA228B928B61,"Some students would disagree to take classes online because some people have a fast away of adapting. Some students like to interact with others,students like to experience the high school life. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4c93fae3f940,DA228B928B61,It all depends on the ways the student learns. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+8cccfd75d42f,DA277EEDBA0C,"There are many people in this world that want change and that includes me, if you would take five minutes out of your day to listen to what I have to say. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+fe6c8040a78c,DA277EEDBA0C,I think the United States Of America should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4e22db8c6d7b,DA277EEDBA0C,"The Electoral College has been here for countless years and many people would be dissapointed that it's gone, people would drowl over it for a very long time, but there are good and bad avantages for both circumstances. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President, that can sum up if someone wins or loses, a big disadvantage in the longrun. Over 60% of voters would perfer a direct election, if we got that voters would not be pressured at all and would have a very good vote that can be proud of. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b39cb6d139b0,DA277EEDBA0C,"There all lots of things wrong with the Electoral College System in my opinon, like that when you vote for your President, your also choosing the electors that come along with him/her. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7484a3f75dcc,DA277EEDBA0C,"There have way over the amount of problems with electors over the past year and it is a huge problem that only some people have noticed. What if there is a prospect of a tie in the electoral vote, that would lead to big time problems and there is a severe chance it will happen. In the United States there are millions of people voting and there not making the votes they really want because the electors. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c095e41345a2,DA277EEDBA0C,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a0f2067962a,DA277EEDBA0C,"if someone is favored the outrageous voters know about the winner-take-all system in each state. The Electoral College System is messing our society up every 4 years, its unfair, outdated, and irrational in so many ways. For an example, in the 2000 U.S presidential race, Al Gore received more indiviual votes then George W. Bush nationwide, but Bush won the election, receiving 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266. Don't get me wrong Bush was a great president, but facts are facts.             ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+adab7c093568,DA61159C1E26,"im writting this letter to you so you consider changing to election by popular vote for the prsident of the united states instead of electoral college. i belive like branford plumer, that the electoral college is very wrong not only because under the electoral college system, voters dont vote for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. but also because it is very unfair to voters, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a6a7120b84ae,DA61159C1E26,"the electoral college is outdated, unfair, and irrational and its time for a change. ",Position,Effective,,,
+19b0a23d2a62,DA61159C1E26,"nevertheless the electoral colleges dispute over its outcome is possible, it also nrequires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal, its winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes does induce the candidates, the electoral college also restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-appotionment of the senate decreed on the constition, and it avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. 
+",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f8b398bf5874,DA61159C1E26,the electoral college method of selecting the president is and will turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19a07578f921,DA61159C1E26,"according to the gallup poll in 2000, 60 precent of voters would prefer a direct election the electoral college is losing the little defenders it has and due to the spurious arguments the electoral college should be abolished ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+769d98188ec1,DA86BC9B9FB6,I think is a good choice for people to take classes online or at home ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8224e8c8f190,DA86BC9B9FB6,they can learn more and concentrate better and put more attention and nobody can distract them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6dcea7307bb3,DA86BC9B9FB6,I think if people do it online or at home they are not going to make friends. Sometimes is good to make friends because they can help you or be with you in someway is good to go school then taking at home or online. Also if they do it online or at home they are going to be more prepared and ready for wet ever situation because they was putting attention in their lessons. But being in a group in school is more interesting because you can meet new people and don't be alone doing the work but everything have their good choices for do it and people can decide how they want to do it or how much they want lo learn. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5dc483e3f74e,DA86BC9B9FB6,some people prefer to take classes from home or online. because they can be more concentrate without nobody distracting them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5822f16c0cbf,DA86BC9B9FB6,"I think it will be a good choice for them to do it online. For example if they are doing work in a group they are talking and don't concentrated but if they are with nobody they can work better and do their work. This can be the reason for more people take that classes because they work better with out no one else. The people who studies online or at home are more intelligent, and learn more because they are concentrate in what they are doing. In sometimes in the schools they are not concentrate because they are playing or talking with their friends and that can distract people. If they make a competition an student who studied on line or at home with one student is a regular school I think the student is not on the school can win because sometimes that students are more prepared then the regular school. Also sometime the students who go to a regular school they just go for play with their friends is good to have some friends but they are not concentrate o they are sleeping when the teacher is explaining and then when they do the exam or quiz they fail. But if one student is studding online or at home they are listening for when they have to take the exams they can pass and are more responsible with that. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55ea2287ccfe,DA86BC9B9FB6,When the school is over at the end of the year some people learn a lot but some people no because they were just playing and don't putting attention or sleeping in class. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0a7e3a8826a9,DA86BC9B9FB6,But the people who studies online or at home they are ready know a lot because they were concentrated and no one was distracting them and that if how they work someones want to learn and pass and someones no each one can take their own decision. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+90eb8b0bcacc,DA86BC9B9FB6,"I think studies online is more better, more productive at the and of the year. Taking classes at home can benefit at the students in many ways and they know more at the end of the school. When the students at the regular school at the end of the year they have an SOL test. some students fail this test because they did not learn nothing for the rest of the year just for be sitting and doing nothing. But if someone who studies at home have the ability to pass the SOL because they were interested of the class of what were they learning and don't have distractions all year.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2b003062f34a,DA9ABB175343,I'm a highschool student who is very involed with polotics and i wanted to write this letter to let you know ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+10a2c7e1cd56,DA9ABB175343,i am in favor of getting rid of the electoral college. I belive that the elcetoral college causes big problems during election time . ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a5a9acc8805e,DA9ABB175343,For example when people say that the electoral college is not taking into consideration to what the people said but only caring about who they want as our president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+efe08f17826a,DA9ABB175343,i know most peole or adults that really vote and our into politics would say otherwise ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f79842179ca8,DA9ABB175343,but i beleive that we should get rid of it and really let the people have a voice and not have a group of people speack for us. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d00c08e2f51c,DA9ABB175343,When i was little they used to tell me that you learn something new evertyday and they were righty i leaen morwe and more everydsy that the electoral cvollege is unconsitional in my eyes ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+9eaf21b14cdf,DA9ABB175343,"why have a group ogf peopole speack for us we have avoice we can do it o our own we need to get rid ofg the electo5ral college for good. So that the peoplew of the
+
+United States of America have a say so in who we choose to run our country ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+246dac99bcfb,DA9ABB175343,Mr. Senator if you would take this into consideration that the electoral college is bad and we need to get rid of it the people during election time would be so happy because whoever wins the vote ffrom the citiens wins the election not a group of politions who procide over us citizens. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d9ce521da338,DAAE254A0B5C,"If I was working for NASA and l had an argument with a person that believes that ''the face'' was created by aliens, I would say that it is just a simple landform that was made on mars. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9a9602d58297,DAAE254A0B5C,"I say this because if I were to work for NASA I would look back at data that will help me defend my answer, that ''the face'' was not created by aliens ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c13c9f140555,DAAE254A0B5C,"For all we know it could just be a mountain that has ''eyes'', ''a mouth'', ''and a nose'' due to shadowing. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3f6178a9b238,DAAE254A0B5C,"We human beings really have no clue if there are aliens or not, we find ''clues'' and believe there are but, in my opinion there are none. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ca5e94ccd8a6,DAAE254A0B5C,In the article Mr. Jim Gavin said ''It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho''. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+63de48e2a83f,DAAE254A0B5C,This is what I would say if I had a discussion with a person who believed ''the face'' was created by aliens.   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+45d9c908b88d,DACF12F21A7C,I think that you should allowed the students of your school to use there cell phones when they have the time to. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f7d9197a3969,DACF12F21A7C,The students should have in mind that when the teacher ask them to put it always that they well. But also to remember that they have the right to use them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50d219152e06,DACF12F21A7C,Will this is why I think that allowing the students to have there phones with them is ok. One because they want to time in school to call friends that may not be in the same school or if they have an important thing to do after school in they can't go. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+777fd57b131e,DACF12F21A7C,Another is if they need help with something and on one is with them . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2c7cac9d7500,DACF12F21A7C,Now I what you might be saying that the students are never going to leave their phones not even if there in class. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c08ba0d1c3bb,DACF12F21A7C,will there can be a punishment to that person that dose not flow the rules. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1339d81aedd3,DACF12F21A7C,You can assigned any thing to that person like after school clean up or Saturday school something like that so that they know not to do it again and that they need to lessen to the teacher when they are ask to ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e6271f3f631,DACF12F21A7C,well that is all i have to say principal.            ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+6e6c58b0fc34,DB20FBDA9A19,"With new technological advances everyday, it is no suprise that there will eventually be driverless cars out on the road. But technology is supposed to get the task at hand done more efficiently, and safer. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+dda268ccd375,DB20FBDA9A19,"And weighing the pros and cons of a driverless car, the cons win ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9e152bc67b8a,DB20FBDA9A19,the driver would still have to pay attention to the road ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7e10661660b2,DB20FBDA9A19,"creates conflict when a crash arouses (who is to blame, the driver or the car?) ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b7946658947b,DB20FBDA9A19,the law doesn't agree with it either. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c182788ecd8b,DB20FBDA9A19,Driving is a skill that requires full attention to the road. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+41c1f3a4676f,DB20FBDA9A19,"Even with cars coming out with new assistant features, no car has yet to be fully driverless, as mentioned in paragraph 7. Even with actions such as steering, accelerating, and braking, the driver still must pay attenion to the road and would have to be notified by the car if a situation occured, also mentioned in paragraph 7. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+21f5ef09e82f,DB20FBDA9A19,It is rare that it is the manufacturers fault for when a car is involved in an accident. But this could change if driverless cars start appearing on roads. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8800d8d18258,DB20FBDA9A19,"Who would be to blame if the car were to wreck, the previously assured driver who believed their car was funtioning properly, or the car that promised to alert the driver if a problem were to arise? This idea is brought up in paragraph 9. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3692be2bfc11,DB20FBDA9A19,"Many states have made it illegal to even test these driverless cars, according to paragraph 9. These illegal laws could change in the future, however, if driverless cars prove to meet safety standards maybe as that of a regular car. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c650cda3faa5,DB20FBDA9A19,"Manufacturers are constantly trying to improve the quality and advances of their cars, but the question is are they taking a step in the right direction with driverless cars? As mentioned earlier, drivers would still have to be alert while driving these supposedly ""driverless"" cars, they would have to worry about whether it was their fault or the cars fault for an accident, and lawmakers would have to determine if these cars are safe enough to be driven on public roads. WIthout a doubt there will be driverless cars in the twenty-first century, but hopefully by that time, the pros will outweigh the cons. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+46f8057b46e8,DB4B78DAADCB,I think that students should participate in sports and activities students should at least have a B or C average in a sport. So that what ever sport they play they can still be in it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9780efe3cf3b,DB4B78DAADCB,We can see what the students think about it to see if they would what the policy change or not ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+dd17d65612e7,DB4B78DAADCB,they probably think if they liked it change or they don't liked it changed to have least have a B average to participate in sports or other activities. I think some of the students would liked the change and some of the others students probably like about the change of the policy that might be possible to change. I have no idea what they would think about the change to the policy that might be possible to be changing when you can only participate in sports or other activities like clubs and all the other stuff. My friend of mine told me she has a C average in one class and the rest she has like a B average she think she does. She also told me if it does change she would say she don't like the policy being changed. Because she said some students wont liked it any way. She bets some would at least like the idea of changed it to have least a B average. My other friends of mine don't want it to change. I agree with them about it possible about it being changed. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+61d337c2a6aa,DB4B78DAADCB,I think some people would like the change so that way they can get better grades so they can also go to the next grade that way they can go to college and live their dr ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a8c118f2979,DB9CAE4A0E72,"In today's society, things are growing and changing at a rapid rate. There are new technological advances and new ideas and innovations that come into this world everyday. One particular subject that comes in mind is the idea of online courses. These courses are mainly for people who do not have easier access or any type of transportation to school which can lead to be very useful. People love this idea and innovation of school and think students could genuinely benefit from this. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of flaws to this, the one major problem that stands out the most is it could cause students to take advantage of these online courses and cheat by using another browser to look up their answer's and could lead to long-term consequences. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+d100b161fb80,DB9CAE4A0E72,"Through these observations, students would not be able to benefit from online courses ",Position,Adequate,,,
+0ca67706b778,DB9CAE4A0E72,"because students are more likely to cheat, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+54251bfaac71,DB9CAE4A0E72,they can gain an in-person experience with teachers ,Claim,Effective,,,
+316bab3bf250,DB9CAE4A0E72,students can build positive relationships at school. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c4af2b3537cc,DB9CAE4A0E72,"Although taking classes from home can be easier to access, students should have more of a in-person experience with teachers to show that they care and help students better understand the questions they have. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8b8275ec5efe,DB9CAE4A0E72,"For instance, I have gone to school from a laptop and in person and having the teachers there in person is a very different experience to have than from learning off of a laptop. Because not only does it show that the teachers care, but it makes the students feel like they are really engaged in the activity and makes it more fun to learn. Teachers set the rule for students and sometimes show them the difference between right and wrong. They also sometimes have students engage in fun activities as for another way to learn. Instead of being taught through a screen, people that have teachers in person help students understand what they are trying to learn and can engage in one-on-one conversations in person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d262ac469a93,DB9CAE4A0E72,"Even though students can learn from home and not go out anywhere, students need to build positive relationships with others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+d0f78d23d0b6,DB9CAE4A0E72,"Friends are an ideal part of everyone's lives and online course do not provide that, but schools do. My friend, who i just recently met and has been home schooled his whole life until his senior year, found it hard to have friends because he did not know anybody. He is a shy person and does not like interacting with any out-going activities because he did not know how to engage with other people. Because of this, people who go to public schools at a young age are more likely to make friends there and have even more friends the more they grow up and as they enter high school. All in all, online courses do not provide people like friends that are a key part of our lives and help us build our character and self-esteem about each other. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ae0268080a53,DB9CAE4A0E72,A major problem about online courses is that students are more likely to cheat on them and use different web browsers to get the answers they need. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ac5b31e8476e,DB9CAE4A0E72,"Unlike online courses, teachers can observe students during their classwork and exam to see if they are cheating or not. For example, a teacher can watch you in person and closely, but the teacher through the screen can only see what you show and not your full body as in person. This shows that cheating could be a major key flaw to online courses and shows that it does not very well help a student learn or understand in any way possible. In fact, it does the opposite of that. Undoubtedly, online courses are subject to very likely cheating and does not prepare students for any type of further learning after high schoo ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ab3db79a97b,DB9CAE4A0E72,"In conclusion, online course do not benefit students because gaining an in-person experience with teachers can help a student learn better from their mistakes on certain types of questions. They also do not benefit students by having more of a likely chance to cheat during exams online. Because of this, this does not prepare students for further growth of knowledge if they want to continue to do school after high school. The final reason students do not benefit from online courses is that students need friends in person because that is what makes them have a good childhood and become a better person based of off their opinions. To conclude, online courses are not a way to help students at all during this day and age. It has too many flaws that can not be fixed unfortunately. A lot of things are growing in this society, but this should not grow any further. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+57543c67aef9,DBACBF67A45C,"Driverless cars are they really a good idea or just an accident waiting to happen? Some people may believe in the driverless car, but others like me see the true danger it brings to the table. These people who are so ready for the future to be here have forgot to look at the possiblities that come along with it. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+527a0cb6f084,DBACBF67A45C,"The idea of such a car is not a bad idea it just needs to be more thought out and processed.
+
+There are many reasons i believe we should wait to produce such a car, ",Position,Effective,,,
+37b36a365f58,DBACBF67A45C,one of the most concerning is legal reasons. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ff2b3c9c5231,DBACBF67A45C,"The text states a question that needs to be answered before an accident happens. The question I am refuring to is, "" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?"" This question alone will cause so many problems if it is not solved before the release of the car. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b57909da5762,DBACBF67A45C,Another concer I have for the car is its safety features. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a951334fffcc,DBACBF67A45C,"An example of one of my concerns is weather or not the car will be able to tell when school hours are active or when work zones are near by. The text states, ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents."" This example makes one flaw with the designe of the car, and thats the fact that what if the car doesn't get the update that the danger zone is near and never alerts the driver. Many computers day by day fail to work properly, so who is to say that our self diving cars will not fail as well to do their jobs. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0b8474d3a5b2,DBACBF67A45C,If our cars dive and control themselves what will keep the man behind the wheel alert or even awake. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8bfaf0552687,DBACBF67A45C,"This could cause health risks to anyone who happens to be driving near a unmaned car. I agree with the states that do not allow the testing of the cars in their respected areas. While states such as California, Nevada, and Florida all allow the cars to be tested. These states are putting their people at risk just so they can find all the flaws of the car. Most people will agree when I say that is it really worth the risk of a human life just for a car that can drive itself but not really control itself. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cff69379dc3a,DBACBF67A45C,All of these risks that I have listed are all for what reward. A car that can drive itself does not have the human capablitiy to keep is passengers safe. All of what I have said is to prevent the lose of a life or even just a law suit. I feel that all my concers raise some major red flags that should be covered before the risk of a life or someone's property. ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f12b4c5c0ce4,DBE4FF1CA803,I think you should let students do community ,Position,Adequate,,,
+53e01b252e21,DBE4FF1CA803,they want to I know you care for the and our well being the students in the that are doing community is doing the right thing buy doing ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+461ee692824b,DBE4FF1CA803,but the students that don't want to do it that's up to the not you may be the principle but you can't make people do things they don't want to do you don't have that power. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a99dc495d014,DBE4FF1CA803,You should let the students do it on free well that well make things much east for you are principle you have a lot of things you do. So don't put to much stuff on yourself ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0307213a7b8c,DBE4FF1CA803,Because if all the students do community service they wont have a lot of time to stay for test that are coming up ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a284356e630e,DBE4FF1CA803,and some times the students have to skip class to water the plants for the community plant sale they have going in the city its a big thing now. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6dccb51f851a,DBE4FF1CA803,Students wont have the time they have now as students any more if you let them do it and they have do community service when its the weekend when have a day without no one after you about some thing than you get a phone call its for community were you have see kids work when its your day off. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6efc5def5071,DBE4FF1CA803,You don't wont that to happen do you so you should let the students have to community thing go cause not a lot of people are going to anyway no students is going to give up there weekend for community service ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72b73b6b1aa9,DBE4FF1CA803,I love the community with all my heart and I to get but asking students is not the way ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7ad57b87aced,DC1DA01985EF,"Freedom to vote for authority figures in America had been an ideal image of government all across the world. However, is our priviledge to vote really honest and are the results of elections really in our hands like we think they are? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+0952a78ffece,DC1DA01985EF,The Electoral College System undoubtedly should be abolished ,Position,Effective,,,
+9b1a80913a90,DC1DA01985EF,because Americans have the right to have full control over who is elected President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+12a2eccedfc0,DC1DA01985EF,"although some may believe that Electoral Colleges avoid the occurance of a run-off election, run-off elections may be avoided with much more reasonable methods. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5c88546d1a7c,DC1DA01985EF,"Clearly, election should be determined by popular vote, and not the Electoral College because Americans earned their right to have full control over the representatives in their government ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1612e5ecfda6,DC1DA01985EF,"According to Source 2, ""state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and... those electors could always defy the will of the people."" The defenders could be completely indifferent about the voters choices, or situations where swing states are borderline one party or another, and the Electoral College allows a limited selelction of people to make the final decision of millions (Source 1). The ballots that we vote in don't even effect the results of the election. It is as if these elections are trying to illude citizens from the fact that the only votes that contribute to the adoption of a new president are the electoral votes. Why bother letting us vote for a president, if only the defenders get to make the decisions? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+31b90bdf6c95,DC1DA01985EF,"In Source 3, Posner states that when there is an unclear plurality in the results of an election, the Electoral College makes it much simpler and more efficient by reducing the number of voters, eliminating the inconvenience factor. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2e2c2a5188af,DC1DA01985EF,This statement appears as a faulty reasoning to have an Electoral College because it is obsurd to remove Americans' right to vote ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+cc64dabb8846,DC1DA01985EF,"Maybe, rather than restricting our rights, the result of a run-off election could be resolved by an Electoral College, but the initial vote should be made only by the citizens, fairly. Depending on the defenders to make the final decision of the leaders of our great country is an overly-cautious effort to avoid a tie, which could be easily resolved. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e0878c538c73,DC1DA01985EF,"You cannot deny, changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States would be extremely beneficial for our country. Citizens would regain their Constitutional-right to vote for the leaders who make major decisions for the entire country. The Electoral College is useful to produce a clear winner in elections, but is evidently not completely necessary and is unfair to voters who want and deserve a say in the outcome(Plumer 13, 14). Abolishing this system would cause for a drastically more fair election and greater citizen satisfaction for multitudinous reasons. Please consider. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+164232d463b8,DC2EE6A2F024,I believe that students should have at least a grade C average to be able to participate in sports and other activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5e4257b6b36c,DC2EE6A2F024,Having a C average isn't failing it just means they need more work to help them out in the subject. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+babcd16e21b9,DC2EE6A2F024,"if they are not doing work they are goofing around in the classroom then yes they shouldn't be aloud, but if they are not goofing around and they are doing their work they just need some more help then they should be able to participate is these extra choricial activities. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+084a9c4d52ac,DC2EE6A2F024,those with D and F average of course they shouldn't be aloud to participate. Now how you can find out if the students are doing their work is ask the teachers how they are behaving and acting in the classroom. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5909dcc93fb6,DC2EE6A2F024,I hope you put my opinion in perspective and will give it some thought. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+3a733ef02b05,DC2EE6A2F024,The ones who need more help maybe the teacher could send a packet or explain more to them so they can get better at it . ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+25b82a1ec39f,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"In life, we are expected to learn. We learn how the world works, how to do things, and learn from the mistakes we make along the way. Now, it is only fair to say that everyone has a different and unique way of learning, whether it be through hands on activities, trial and error, or just being told what to do. The demand for these needs is high due to the rising population in public schools, and not every student's needs can be met at all times. Some of the students may struggle based on how the curriculum is taught in one class, and excel in another one taught differently. It all depends on how each student receives information the best. Certain educational centers provide distance learning, which provides students with the opportunity to complete their studies and courses online. The courses offer students the chance to have video conferences, independent learning, and many more things that are made for the single purpose of ensuring education. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+f3dbdb4ffd7f,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"As technology advances, this programming should be required for school systems to partake in and offer to their students who would like to take their education by the horns and steer it in the right direction. ",Position,Effective,,,
+99f73d36081a,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"Throughout the school day, everyone has that one class they absolutely hate. They walk into the room and it's like a minute turns from 60 to 1,000 seconds and they are stuck there forever. In this time, nothing gets done and the same amount gets learned. This class consists of about half who actually care about what the subject is, and the other half who can't seem to control themselves enough to not act out in spite of not caring. The half of the students who actually pay attention are stuck with a teacher who has to repeat themselves a thousand times a class period when they should be on another chapter by now. This not only frustrates the teacher and the students, but it creates negative air between the students and the teacher. I mean, who wouldn't hate a teacher that talks about the mitochondria a BILLION times a day? In this situation, some perks of distance learning are shown. The students who show passion to learn can be offered one-on-one time with the instructor through video conferencing, which will not only help the faster paced learners, but take away some of the tension in the classroom. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+7cdb22bcf6d3,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"Time with a teacher face to face on your own creates comfort and trust built into the instructor-student relationship, promoting better learning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4bdf9e1536a3,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"One of the morals that childhood has taught us is that ""slow and steady always wins the race"". This moral is not only unethical, but it shows how unaware we really are. Everyone works at their own pace; some faster and some slower. It's not that the slower paced students are unintelligent or not as bright as the others, it's just their way of producing whatever work they are learning. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4cfa968bce4,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"Through distance learning, students don't have to feel pressured to work as fast as other peers and can learn on their own time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+423dc567c66d,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"It also gives students a sense of responsibility and makes them come to terms with reality in a way. This way, they don't have someone constantly spoon-feeding them deadlines and due dates, but they have to remember them on their own. Learning how to budget time is a very important skill that is taught this way, and it is helpful preparation for college. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+359f25b5ba24,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"Some people have a rougher time in college than others and are scared to commit due to outside sources. Say you are a 20 year old woman in her sophomore year of college, working a tiring job on the night shift, and struggling to pay rent due to classes. You manage to slide by in your courses, trying to get the best out of your work, but you can't help but be late to most classes due to oversleep and exhaustion. Luckily, there are specific colleges that provide classes that can be scheduled around your late nights, and shifts. These colleges are technology-based and provide classes for whenever you need to or are able to come in. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a89e311d6c03,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"They respect your employment, and encourage your scheduling as long as you turn in work on time, meet deadlines, and come in to a class period whenever you can. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a38b9c6761c5,DC5BDFA3BFD6,This system of distanced learning provides people a head start on life and their career all at once. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+36f22d48ce9d,DC5BDFA3BFD6,It is true to say that most of us would prefer a quiet and independent environment over a loud and busy one any day. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c708e882f2a4,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"Loud noise and stimulation do not mix, in fact, it only causes more distraction. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8b3db8c3ffe6,DC5BDFA3BFD6,some kids do prefer social learning environments rather than the quiet. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2d1e42f60384,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"These learning environments surround students by other peers and encourage debates, understandings, and protests. The benefits may seem negative, but in these events students start to bounce ideas off of each other and grow in thought processing. Students will attract those who agree with their views and form bonds, creating comfort in the classroom for them. It is easy to feel alone when you don't understand a topic, but it can be valuable to have that other person there in the class who doesn't quite get the same problem you don't. You can collaborate, put together what you both know, and come up with a solution. this not only provides for better learning, but provides children with the social skills they will need for life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e51f2e218269,DC5BDFA3BFD6,"The goal of distance learning is solely to bring out the best learning capability of students. It is provided so that students of different learning paces can have different method options as to which best fits their area of learning. There is something for everyone, whether it be independent teachings, one-on-one time with teachers, or staying in the classroom. Everyone should have the opportunity to test out distance learning and see whether it is the optimal choice for them or not. We all learn at different paces, but it is important to let ourselves grow on different paths than we thought we would.  ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f9a0c0e18def,DC67C20F18B4,"Have you ever thought of a time when you were not sure if you should help the community or not. To me, that has happened multiple of times. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ec7dd4d42386,DC67C20F18B4,I think that the students should be required to perform in the community because it would help them in many ways. ,Position,Effective,,,
+f6a53387fbb6,DC67C20F18B4,"Helping the community learn how to be unselfish, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fb53b6c564d5,DC67C20F18B4,"be better people in their lives ahead, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a6a2227a191f,DC67C20F18B4,and it would benefit everybody in that community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+01140f00c7ad,DC67C20F18B4,"While the students do this task of helping in the community, they will see how helping and thinking about others would do them much good. Not only that but that would also help them to learn to put other peoples needs in front of their wants. They can want a fancy sports car while another person may NEED food to put on the table and feed their children. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+03093a421d40,DC67C20F18B4,"By helping people now and planting trees so on so forth, they will learn that by helping other people would make them feel good inside. That would make them feel that helping others is a fantastic thing that they should carrying on through out their whole life. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9697ab265527,DC67C20F18B4,Something as simple as helping a senior citizen cross the street would make a HUGE difference. Planting a tree would give more oxygen to the air and fertilize the soil with its nutrients. doing any little good deed would help the environment and the community around it. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+775348df1ac1,DC67C20F18B4,"In retrospect, this is what a good deed would look like if the students were to perform in the environment. It would be a good idea because it would teach the students not to be selfish, be better people, and it would benefit the whole community at that. I personally think it's a great idea to have the students be required to perform in the community. How about you? what do you think we should do? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7a5902ae00ea,DC9023374572,I think we should keep the way we elect our President ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e8f2c7a0bbda,DC9023374572,because we have for been doing this for so long this why would we change it if it's already perfect ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19575eada4aa,DC9023374572,And mostly because if we were to change it then the most of the former US Presidents would'nt even be President because of there rivals ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c0bb533ec864,DC9023374572,"actually had most votes, for instance in the 2000 U.S. President race , Al Gore received more individual votes then George W. Bush nationwide, but Bush won the election, receiving 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266, so you see? Bush was'nt the best but he was the closest thing to it, imagine how the U.S.  would be if someone else was President before. Would it be the same? Better? Worse? We will never know because we cant see things that never happened. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+34c665be8f34,DC9023374572,And isnt the Electoral College a lot eaiser then an election by the popluar vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3bc6881e6844,DC9023374572,"So why change it now? We have been doing it this way for over 50 years and we never had a mistake, well not a big one at the very least.         ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a53143b0ac3b,DC93D8BDE631,"""Unmasking the Face on Mars"" is a hard subject for some people. Not everybody thinks its a natural landform but many scientist do! ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+fb9d5ea6a906,DC93D8BDE631,"The ""face"" on Mars could be many things but scientist have evidence that it is a natural landform ",Position,Adequate,,,
+abd3478e089a,DC93D8BDE631,In the story it says that the natural artifact is like some landforms in the Snake River Plain of Idaho ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97fdfde0332b,DC93D8BDE631,It also says that few scientist believe the Face was an alien artifact so if it's not that and that have other evidence it has to be a natual artifact. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3a178f58cc44,DC93D8BDE631,The Face is very similar to natural artifacts here on Earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+d5ecd74a04c8,DC93D8BDE631,In the story it talks about a place in idaho that is very similar to the Face. It also says it looks very much like a lava dome. Scientist say a place in Idaho that is called Middle Butte looks very similar to the Face. The pictures the very nice camera took of the Face is proof that they do look alike and that it is just a natural artifact. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f621cd03db8c,DC93D8BDE631,Not very many scientist believe that the Face is an alien artifact and they back that up with the fact that it doesn't have the features of it ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0cee821d1a0c,DC93D8BDE631,It might look very much like a humans face but they do not believe that. There scientist and they have evidence that it is not human like its just a natural artifact. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+813ce00f1447,DC93D8BDE631,Some people might believe that it is a human face ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+a868179d14b1,DC93D8BDE631,the face does look like it but no it is a natural artifact ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d07905e35803,DC93D8BDE631,"It is a natural artifact because scientist believe that and they have facts to back up there reasoning, for example in the story it talks about how the ""Face on Mars"" was a huge hit to scare people and things like that and then scientist come out and say they have conspiracy theories that the face is not evidence that there is life on Mars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9027050f7ecf,DC93D8BDE631,"All in all, scientist have many theories and evidence that the Face is a natural artifact. The Face might actually look like a person but there isn't facts yet that show there is life on Mars. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+39a89c335ceb,DCC759FDB81B,The idea of enforcing community service on all students is a good idea. ,Position,Effective,,,
+9dc3a536ddac,DCC759FDB81B,I believe that it is a good idea because everyone should be taking a part in making the world a better place. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0923606e816a,DCC759FDB81B,"If you have all student do some sort of community service it will make slowly but surely make this town a better place. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6039ad6f2427,DCC759FDB81B,The decision weather to enforce all student to do community service is a fabulous idea. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6b450be48706,DCC759FDB81B,"Many of the student at our school already do community service, but by enforcing this is will push us kids to get involved. Not only will this benefit the student's it will benefit the people in town. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+18f1614a5c00,DCC759FDB81B,It is not like your asking to go out and do community service for ever. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0a65d7902d5e,DCC759FDB81B,"You are just asking student to get out and help out, which might be as simple as picking up garbage on the side of the highway, or volunteering at a nursing home. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+658d8016c04c,DCC759FDB81B,All of these are great ways to get involved. i think the idea of enforcing community service is a great idea. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5ead877b8ce3,DCDE1C43C218,"Every 4 years, the first Tuesday in November. When its time for it, president elections is one of the most hectic times of the year. But what should the winner depend on? ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+076d1c18bd6d,DCDE1C43C218,Electoral College should be removed by the government and just have popular vote be responisble. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+89139cf2ac63,DCDE1C43C218,"Electoral College can have electors go on the opposite canidates side so they lost a vote, which is just wrong. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6392d615ab30,DCDE1C43C218,"One may say that Electoral College is the best system for voting, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+933f5f3c842a,DCDE1C43C218,but then again that may just be the cheaters. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2a7f7958bcb6,DCDE1C43C218,"Electoral College believers think that having electors go on either side to let one canidate win, is right. ""Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote..""(Posner). So these Electoral College followers agree with the electors actually selecting the winner because they don't have to do anything. People can just sit back and watch the electors take the power, while the others do nothing but be slumps. In source one, the Office of the Federal Register mention that ""when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors."", which means that if voters have friends in the position of an elector, voters might just vote for the elector because theres nothing else to really pay attention to. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+63a38f03acac,DCDE1C43C218,"Even though there are people who support the Electoral College, there are many people who are against it. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b17a239fcc99,DCDE1C43C218,"In source three, Posner states ""it is the electors who elect the president, not the people.""If one has gone through an election, theres a long process and hassle of being able to vote, but if people go through the craziness to vote, why not make the vote count?""""Faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.""(Plumer, paragraph 11). Not only are voters wasting their time to vote but the electors cheat. For example, if one candidate has the urge to win, they will send one of their electors to be on the opponents side so the opponent loses a vote that they believed would be theres. Electoral College also may not be fair to those in a small state. ""a large state gets more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does..."", as said by Posner. Its not fair that even the people who vote from a small state, won't really get recognized because there are bigger states to overrule, and even then, the electors will still choose who they desire. Electoral College is an unfair, and a cheating way to vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5156d65b78cd,DCDE1C43C218,"To conclude the argument, Electoral College should forsure be removed. Citizens favor popular vote over an electors vote. Candidates and voters enter a whole different threshold to express their political preferance. Why should the government even have voting if there really not truly being seen in the correct way. Citizens want to take a stand and vote in what the mind believes in. Take out Electoral College, and let the voters vote, actually count. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+cd2d6debafd4,DD2345CB8055,"i think that we should keep the electorial college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+fd9965bb7995,DD2345CB8055,because  it is more sufficient and we are used to it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+09b258e8a7f2,DD2345CB8055,The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise Between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e743c33a1d6b,DD2345CB8055,"COMPROMISE
+
+is the big word of the day. Most compromises are the right way to go in many occasions. also, it says that it was in THE CONSTITUTION ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+264543c5ae51,DD2345CB8055,"Our founding fathers have already had this argument hundreds of years ago, and they agreed on something that has worked for many years, so why would we changte something thats working? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d7d766516561,DD2345CB8055,"The elecotrial College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electorial votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+33dea902756c,DD2345CB8055,The electorial college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electorial votes is required to elect the president. Your states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation : one for each member in the House of representitives plus two for your senators. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+45f1ed4b2389,DD474E5804C0,"Do you think students should work on assignments from school at home? 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bbb928fb13b9,DD474E5804C0,"
+In this prompt
+
+I will argue about how students can study from long distance, not all schools approve the current subject ",Position,Adequate,,,
+5d3b05726055,DD474E5804C0,If students were to study from home it would be difficult for them to understand what the assignment that is being asked to complete at certain time. The students should be able to afford a device which is necessary to study any subject. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2ddb7335e980,DD474E5804C0,Attending classes from home can cause for students to be able to work more and do their assignments on time. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e157c5c9510b,DD474E5804C0,Schools will not exist if students leave to study home which will make it hard for them to communicate with teachers when help is needed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+52be6a521d4c,DD474E5804C0,"Students would not meet each other or talk physically which would be awkward, can cause them to not trust each other if it comes to a project that needs to be done. Physical education would not be a class since everything would be on devices which is a conflict, which is needed to graduate. In many short word students will be gaining so much weight that they'll not be able to do certain sports they want or walk to their destination. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+46bbbe5f2fda,DD474E5804C0,Typing online or video conferencing is not easy if the person on camera is shy and doesn't like video conferencing which can be very often. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fb973f73a125,DD474E5804C0,Accessing to both subjects can not be trusted if the school will be monitoring every movement you take on your device. Testing online can be easy to cheat if the teacher is not around walking and watching what your doing. Students might not know many things but cheating and being sneaky are the two most known words we understand very well. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9703430680b8,DD474E5804C0,"In other words there are advantages to studying online, disadvantages online and it would be a big disappointment for students to fail almost every class that needs to be taken for graduation. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a1e7ef8c7ba,DD474E5804C0,"If they have a job they will consider work their first priority instead of school. Student's would not receive a scholar ship or diploma so that they can go to college and accomplishing the goal of having a better job. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9363fe377f76,DD474E5804C0,"Some people say that school is very important for students, that they'll earn more money than their parents who probably dont have a well paid job and education. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b1ba5ad0cdce,DD474E5804C0,"But I think it can benefit sometimes it can be a amazing idea for students to study home because they won't drop out of school. Students have different emotions that trigger them to want to leave school behind, since they start working more to pay bills that need to be paid each month. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+1eee3909cc4c,DD474E5804C0,"
+All students should go to school to focus on what they want to be in life or do. Physical experience is not the same as typing online or video conference. Knowing that student's can succeed in different ways is not bad even so they will be expected to have any sort of education someday in the future. School is providing knowledge for those who pay attention to school and more. Believing you can do what you always dreamed of is a motivation that will help learn more about life and the way it works.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff3f4a3e8268,DD586A625C89,"In my opinion, I strongly believe that cell phones should be turned off and put into people lockers during the school day other than allowing students to have their phones at lunchtime. ",Position,Effective,,,
+93693a63e694,DD586A625C89,"In this generation, too many kids are using their cell phones in rule breaking, grade declining ways. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d7a6e14f781b,DD586A625C89,"First off, if students are allowed to have their phones on at lunch, it would just encourage kids to take their phones into their class and text their friends while missing important information. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a8a60886f872,DD586A625C89,"We all know that this is already a big problem here. If the new rule is made, the no cell phone rule wont get any 'better'. In fact, the problem will just slowly get worse until texting in class gets out of hand. If cell phones are allowed in school just during lunch, it could be in one kid's mind thinking, ""If its allowed at lunch, then the teacher wont be so strict on texting in class."" Once one kid starts flipping out the cell phone in class, other people will catch on and turn on their mobile devices too. In a matter of months, it could lead to more detentions, more suspensions, and more angry parents. So think, what is the positive of having cell phones even at lunch? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+85086c555909,DD586A625C89,"Another reason why cell phones shouldn't even be allowed is the lingering question, ""Why do kids need to text in school when their friends are there?"" ",Claim,Effective,,,
+dc5144d84425,DD586A625C89,"Sure, using your phone outside of school to contact your friend is reasonable. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b1238f716ab8,DD586A625C89,"But If you have the same class with your buddy, you don't need to pop out your cell phone just to get the buzz on who's dating who. In other words, cant you talk to your friends at lunch time? ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+48e026dbb6b1,DD586A625C89,That is the main reason why lunchtime was created in schools- to talk to your friends instead of using the alternative cell phone. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+67a0d9fb3f84,DD586A625C89,"Also, if cell phones weren't allowed in school and teachers really cracked down on the new rule, it would stop kids right in their tracks from attempting to get their cell phones out while they're learning about the Louisiana Purchase. Overall, this rule would set a great example for kids and teach them that cell phones are a distraction and lead you out of school. This would be a win-win situation. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8cb2e8cd7db6,DD586A625C89,"In the end, cell phones are really meant for outside of school and immediate emergencies. At best, i recommend that students should have their cell phones off and in their locker during the school day. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b85ea86ab388,DD8649A7235B,Our community probably doesn't look as mush as perfect as you see it. There's a lot of people out there that throw trash around or don't cut the grass from abandoned buildings. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+814ff3f84aec,DD8649A7235B,I've been thinking that is maybe the time to step it up and get all the students to at least to an hour of community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+177f2485bccd,DD8649A7235B,"You should probably require students to do community service. I mean, it's for the community to look better. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+97d070ad3e28,DD8649A7235B,"I did that in sixth grade and I can do it my last year here too. It's not a really fun experience but I'm going to do it for other people to be thankful of me too.
+
+We should probably start by a Saturday instead of being at home bored not getting you anywhere. Starting by groups seems like a good start I would enjoy that.
+
+Another excellent time would be in the summer. It's practically when more people go out and go by our community. It will look really nice if we would do a little clean up to it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+caf4b2b52f02,DD8649A7235B,"Please, get us students to that job. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b078c2697511,DD8649A7235B,"It doesn't take time away from me, I could see my friends another time. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+76e8b6424054,DDB424217004,I think everyone would agree that community service can get a little annoying ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d00f2bd0e277,DDB424217004,"However, doing community service, whether you like it or not, makes everyone a better person. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+f65ca6d3826a,DDB424217004,It's always nice to help someone out or make our community a better and nicer place to live in. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e3c7f38054ad,DDB424217004,Community service can be anything from picking up trash that you see lying around to visiting a nursing home just to brighten someone's day ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fb880c819609,DDB424217004,I understand that not everybody has a lot of time on their hands with sports and all different types of activities ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5db303de40f8,DDB424217004,but sometimes missing out on things that might be fun to you is worth it in the end. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d59545e494e3,DDB424217004,"For example, my Mom Mom is a clown. One time I went with her to the nursing home and I can not even tell you how good it felt to see those people smile. With my Mom Mom and I visiting I could just tell how much it meant to them. My Mom Mom would pop one of her corny jokes ... but the patients in the nursing home absolutely LOVED our company. I could tell just by the way they looked at us with a smile from ear to ear that we brightened up their day. I had to miss skating, a sport that i have been doing since I was two years old, to do this community service project, but let me tell you... it is DEFINATELY worthwhile. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56713840686b,DDB424217004,"The feeling you get when you see these people's faces are priceless. It's amazing how contagious a smile is. You can not get that feeling of accomplishment... or that feeling that you actually made someone's day that much better any other way other than performing community service. Yes, it sounds like a pain. I do not know any other way to say it other than to BELIEVE ME when i say that knowing that you helped our community in a positive way is one of the greatest things ever. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+67a9327553ee,DDB424217004,"Whether it is walking a marathon to raise money, picking up trash lying around, visiting a nursing home, feeding the poor, donating food or clothes to a charity, or simply just making someone smile, community service is so easy to do and makes our society a much safer and nicer place. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+439199655ff2,DDB424217004,community service does everyone good. Not only does it help our society but it also makes everyone a better person inside and out. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+15f77a6982e4,DDB51D1B4A5F,I heard that you were deciding on whether we should or shouldn't do community service as a requirement. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+7f8b4fc192ab,DDB51D1B4A5F,I don't think that you should make students do community service. I have some reasons on why you should not make us. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b4720c3ba58a,DDB51D1B4A5F,Those hours of community service could be spent doing homework or studying. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9463985af90b,DDB51D1B4A5F,"Someone who does sports barely has enough time to get their stuff done as it is. Let alone adding some more hours to that of being away from your homework. Some people might have other things in their life that takes up plenty of time. Someone with broken bones needs physical therapy. Some people might have parents who are split up, and they only get to spend time with one of the parents for a little each week. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6fa4f56a6875,DDB51D1B4A5F,People who don't do community service will find it hard because they have never done it before. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6f16e8f424e4,DDB51D1B4A5F,"They can be taught, yes, but if you are trying to do something nice, it should be a kind act on your own. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0e771823bb8b,DDB51D1B4A5F,Actions without meaning do nothing. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26b644ef3a62,DDB51D1B4A5F,"If you graciously take time out of your own day on purpose to help others, then you are doing a very kind act. If you are doing it because someone told you to, it has no meaning. It is just a chore. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea805d703a72,DDBE5B47593D,"If I was a scintst at NASA discussing the Face. I whould have to prove to the person i was discussing with that it was made by it,s self not alien to do that i need facts about mars. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+7d05be7c09c4,DDBE5B47593D,"In paragraph 3 the passege stated that a few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to to see the caption noted a huge rock formation. Which resembles a human head form by shadows giving the illusion eys nose and mouth. the authors resoned it whould ba good way to engage the public and attract attetion to mars.
+
+Like the authors want to do mars became popualr in pargraph 5 it stated that The Face on Mars had became a pop icon it has starred in a hollywhood film appeared in books, magazines, radio taalk shows even haunted grocery store check out lines for 25 years. Some people think the Face bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence NASA whould rather hide.
+
+Some people belived the Face was an alien artifact photographing cydonia became a prioriy for NASA when mars Global Surveyor arrived at the red planet in Sept. 1997 eighteen long years after the. Viking missions eneded people felt that was important to taxpayers.         ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+271cff619168,DDCF594E44D1,The peope of American should let their voice be heard. Why should we rely on the electoral college to pick our prisendent? In fact if you're going to rely on the electoral college to pick our next president why let civilized American citizens vote? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5fa697742c32,DDCF594E44D1,I would say it is time for a change and let the American people's voice be heard. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f46c64bdc22f,DDCF594E44D1,"It seems as if the passage is more in favor of elections based on the electoral college votes. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. At the most basic level,the electoral college is unfair to voters because it's a winners takes all system. The electoral colllege consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect your president. The elctoral college is anachronism and it's time we should be open minded and look in to the future and rely on the Americans votes we should not rely on 538 people to vote for the millions of people we have in America. Even if we had a combination of  the popular vote with elctoral college that would make it more fair than just having the electoral college pick the president they want in office. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+463295e9ddd2,DDCF594E44D1,"Instead of relying on this piece of history lets rely on bring cheap clothes,food,and gas prices back. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e433c96af39f,DDF611F84032,All or most of the students like to be involved in a lot of things and do something that they enjoy doing or like to do. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+68620be2aac6,DDF611F84032,I think that the students with average of a grade C should be able to participate in sport and other activities. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+114f49d354ee,DDF611F84032,Students with grade C should be able to participate in sport and activities ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3eb0c927222a,DDF611F84032,"because C is not bad of a grade! It is still considered as a passing grade in all the grades. If most of the students have a grade C as an average and they wouldn't be able to participate in sports or activities, then there will be almost no students involved in anything! ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a77c4cac1f37,DDF611F84032,"I think that activities are not the distraction for students not to study very well to get a B, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+58b595c90ad3,DDF611F84032,"it is most likely they don't want to or just spend time doing something else out of school. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c5c028e9632a,DDF611F84032,"If the students wouldn't be able to participate in school sports or activities they are more likely to go and do things out of school, and be involved in something else as well. All the kids like different activities and I think that they should have an opportunity not just study everyday, but also have some fun and do different things to prepare them for their future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ee88c3c1245b,DDF611F84032,When a student would only be allowed to study and not to participate in anything else they wouldn't have any time to have a break or to relax from a long day that they had in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0aac4168d63a,DDF611F84032,Students participating in sports and activities helps them take down the stress ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ef7c801d92d,DDF611F84032,"that they might of had in school, with friends or in a family, by doing sports or being involved in other activities and being able to communicate with others. That takes their mind of something that had bothered them. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7c37d5be0a66,DDF611F84032,"I think that students with an average of a grade C should be able to participate in sports and activities. To have fun with friends and doing things they like. Also, taking the stress down and having something else to do out of school. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dcb5d1846673,DE05DCB75D79,"Driverless cars is the way the automotive industry is heading, and will be here sooner than people think. Many big names that specialize in different aspects of technology are working on driverless cars. Some of the biggest are Google, BMW, and Tesla. People have long dreamed of driverless cars, and in the 1950s GM tried ""smart roads"" as a solution, but was soon disregarded because of the cost. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+5262f5441942,DE05DCB75D79,"Almost all the successful driverless cars have been producted by big successful companies that are household names. Google is highly respected and is working on a driverless cars, and in total those cars have driven more than half a million miles. In those half a million miles not a single crash has happened. BMW is also helping solve problems with driverless cars by intoducing ""Traffic Jam Assistant."" This new technology requires the driver to have their hands on the wheel as the car drives itself in case the person is needed to take over. Also Toyota has helped set the templet for Google's smart car by producing the Toyota Prius. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2881236c796c,DE05DCB75D79,"The knowledge of how to design a smart car has been around for a long time, but the technology is just now letting us build our dream car ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b94baafcda8,DE05DCB75D79,Improvments on technology and cheaper technology makes it easier to build a smart car. An example of technology that has under gone this transformation are all the different sensors in cars. This technology is also making cars safe like an antilock break. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+383d7603ffd9,DE05DCB75D79,"People have long dreamed of driverless cars, and the human race is known for making dreams into realality. For a long time driverless cars have only been seen in television shows and movies, but now big name companies are working hard to solve the probelms that face smart cars to make it come true. This dream is nothing new, and was first tested in 1950s by GM. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+39ff1aea3f85,DE05DCB75D79,Driverless cars are not to far away in the future and will help make our lives safer. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f1b2c3608281,DE05DCB75D79,"With some of the best companies in the world investing time, money, and reseach on smart cars the only question is when. When it is a dream of not just a person, but millions that in it's self is enough drive. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e1a00d4e5239,DE2E4AFB2721,"The electoral college is something that has been loved, hated, and debated on for some years now. We couold abolish it or keep it the way it is. Some say the electoral college is undemocratic and unfair to the voters and the candidates. But some say it is the best way to vote. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+47c13fb910fa,DE2E4AFB2721,I'ts seen both ways but is there anything we can do about it? Good or Bad ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b457023e2cf6,DE2E4AFB2721,"The Electoral College is a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The group of electors for your state are selected by the cnadidate""s political party. So when you vote for a specific candidate you are voting for the electors he is supported by. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7efb017064c8,DE2E4AFB2721,So why do people want to aboplish the electoral college completely? Because there are some serious things wrong with it. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+881d5d9d820a,DE2E4AFB2721,"perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote"" (Source 2, Paragraph 4). How can there be a tie in the election of the president? Perhaps because sometimes the electors get to thinking in another midset and vote for the wrong candidate...Yes that is poosible. When people vote for there candidate the electors are the ones being selected and aren't always the way they were in their chosing so therefore there can be a serious tip in votes if the electors don't vote for the candidate of the party they were selected by. ""In 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a diect election"" (Source 2, Paragrph 1). The people don't want the electoral college anymore, Who's to say they ever did? 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+e14ef6da4861,DE2E4AFB2721,But even know some don't want the electoral college there are some who prefer to keep it. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e8f457de835f,DE2E4AFB2721,"each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee, and that trust is rarely betrayed"" (Source 3, Paragraph 2). So when the party selects their electors they are most likely to select the candidate of the party they were selected by. There is also regional appeal,if a president only has diserably mojority of vores in a certain region of the country he is ""unlikely to be a succesful president""( Source 3, Paragraph 5) . This is because if a president is only desired by a certain region and not the rest of the country, the wants of the rest of the country aren't met and he most likely will not tend to the needs of them, and ultimately doesn't have a chance of being selected as president. Finally, when no candidate for president has a clear majority of votes, the electoral college's votes gove a clear winner and a candidate is selected. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88fce33fcb11,DE2E4AFB2721,both sides have reasonable arguments to if the elctoral college will stay for good or be abolished completely. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c3421972295e,DE68828CC67E,"Most people feel good when they help other people, and they do it as often as they can. They might be a volunteer at a soup kitchen, donate money, pick up litter, help someone put up their groceries, or any other community service. Volunteering is a great way to help the community and anyone can do it, however volunteering is called volunteering for a reason. When you volunteer, you're willing to give up your time to help someone else. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ee3f0424ca67,DE68828CC67E,"You shouldn't force someone to volunteer for community service. Volunteering is a choice. That's why it's called ""volunteer."" ",Position,Effective,,,
+9c571b8742e5,DE68828CC67E,"Some people might want to help out, but they don't have time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+426d25ca853e,DE68828CC67E,"They could have a job after school, plus have to do all of the homework required by your teachers. If you force students to perform a service, they might not be able to reach there highest point academically because they're so bogged down with a to-do list. Students would get too stressed out with everything they have to do. Stress isn't good physically or mentally, and that could cause grades to go down. Not having to do community service would give students more time for studying and other things like an after-school sport or club. If you want more kids to participate in extra-curricular things, you can't add another burden onto their shoulders. You know what they say, All work and no play... ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+88badd88b421,DE68828CC67E,"Helping out the community is very important, but community service isn't the only way for a person to help out in the community. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8a89afae600a,DE68828CC67E,"Most people recycle, or donate old clothes to a local charity. A recent survey showed that starting a recycling or donating program at our school would have a lot more willing participants than required community service would. In fact, 90% of the student population said they would love to help out with my proposed programs, whereas only 40% would be willing to volunteer for a service. Donating and recycling, or another idea you may have that's easy do to and doesn't take too much time, would be just as helpful to the community as volunteer work would be. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c6c503dd8f3b,DE68828CC67E,"There is no need for you to require community service in our school. Don't force students to be a volunteer, because then it just wouldn't be volunteering. They wouldn't be as willing to do the service, and they might not do the job as well as they would if they did it by choice, and the community service would be a waste of time if the helper didn't do it right or well enough. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+ce6483751cdd,DE78893DB845,"Throughout time, there have been countless sci-fi films and movies of cars that could drive themselves. However, what may once have seemed like fiction is now becoming a reality. Many companies, like Google, General Motors, and BMW have been working on driverless-car technologies since as early as the late 1950's. Although there are many positive sides to these new technologies, many people fail to realize their potentials and feel as if they are dangerous. This, however, is where they are wrong ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e3ce5d883454,DE78893DB845,Driverless cars are a great idea in new technology ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e4cfb96a4b7b,DE78893DB845,they save on feul and money ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a42267cbb97,DE78893DB845,"they provide people more opportunities, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+16d4fd7e2383,DE78893DB845,they make driving safer. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c0dcd7bf6ec6,DE78893DB845,Driverless cars can overall save us on an abundance of gas and money. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ab691096dd7b,DE78893DB845,"As stated in the ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" article, Google cofounder Sergey Brin believes that his idea of a driverless car public transport system would use half the feul as today's taxis. As our feul is a fossil feul, meaning one day it will run out, using as little of it as possible is much more than just a good thing. Also, using this idea of a driverless car public transport system would save us a lot of money. Not having to drive your own car and fill it up every week would save you quite a bit on gas money. Also, you would not have to pay for repairs or damages to your vehicle. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+096a9c8bd0a1,DE78893DB845,they also would provide many more opportunities for people all over the world ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+8a3fad0f7a14,DE78893DB845,"Most of the population of the Earth cannot afford the luxury of their own vehicle. Since they do not have their own means of transportation, it is much harder for them to get a job. Of course, in bigger cities, like Chicago or New York, there are taxis, subways, trains, and busses that provide people the means of transportation that they need. However, in smaller cities and poorer countries, there are not any means of public transportation. In my town, for instance, there are not any busses, trains, taxis, Uber Drivers, or Subways. The only way to get from place to place is by your own car, getting a ride from someone else, by bike, or by foot. If we had a driverless car transpotation system in places like this, many people would be provided with many more oppourtunities to be able to travel from place to place. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1e9bbf54575d,DE78893DB845,"Driverless Car's would prevent many accidents, therefor making driving safer for everyone. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1fc0fcb608d0,DE78893DB845,"Technologies are being created in many types of cars that prevent accidents before they happen. For instance, many cars are now being made with breaks that stop themselves when they sense that the vehicle is in danger of hitting something/someone. Some other companies, like GM, have developed Driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing up into an object so that the driver can take control. Many ""heads-up"" displays like this one are being created to prevent tons of accidents and possible deaths and/or injuries related to driving. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c3e3c75da4da,DE78893DB845,"driverless cars are a safe, efficient, and logical choice for the future of transportation. Driverless cars are a great idea in new technology because they save on feul and money, they provide people with more opportunities, and they make driving safer. With these new technologies, we are slowly making our world into a more efficient and safe place in which to live. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6bd443871a66,DE842CB71C02,"So alot of people think that ""The Face on Mars"" is an alien type of structure. People say this kind of things becuase they have no proof that it's a formation just like earth have formations. 
+",Lead,Adequate,,,
+61dc12983fcb,DE842CB71C02,Im here to tell you people that thats a type of formation that happens ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d99b36ce2583,DE842CB71C02,Like Garvin said its a type of landform that happens in the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3a5675ccd7d,DE842CB71C02,"Us as a NASA team we work hard to solve what it was such as reasearch, scientists working, and our team that snapped the picture. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+640e1a4935f9,DE842CB71C02,"All of us tried to figure out what it was yes we might of thought that it was some type of alien structure but like i said working hard got us where we needed to be. After what we needed to figure out we realized that it wasn't some alien structure using the ""Rule of Thumb"" we saw the picture 3 times bigger ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f704ae1063d1,DE842CB71C02,After we saw that image we atoumatically realized that it was a simple formation same as what happens to earth ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a423c292c7e8,DE842CB71C02,Example like what happen to Colorado. It use to have a river but after years the water started to evaperate and it started forming big giant rocks ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd57aab9a724,DE842CB71C02,Thats why i don't thing that its some kind of alien structure. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+018e28f06b19,DEB6EF459B10,"It would be fare to other kids if you put "" you cant play any sports unless you have a B average or more"" ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+d3593684c749,DEB6EF459B10,so many kids probably couldn't play their favorite sports and their parents would get mad enough to have them switch schools ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+70b1f303ef86,DEB6EF459B10,say they can have a C average in their grade the school would be a lot better place and wouldn't be as boring as it is. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+87a682583fb3,DEB6EF459B10,"you could have a really good athlete who does every sport and is a super good running back for the team, real fast and every thing. what happens if he dropped from a
+
+B average to a C average? that's what i am talking about. you can just at least say you have 2 weeks to get up your grades and if you don't then to bad so sad. if you're school is having a big dodge ball tournament after school and you have teams you play with and you have a C average then its really boring for you and your dodge ball team is one man short and they cant play because of you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a9a61e67c87,DEB6EF459B10,"all the student would want to change that other than the really smart students who have A averages, but that isn't the case here. its just wouldn't be fair to all the other student who liked sports in that school. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+668f35f67578,DECAE402BB38,"The author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars in the article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"". ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3856e2bd8067,DECAE402BB38,In my opinion based on the reading there are more negative aspects to these cars than positive. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+49ca17796e68,DECAE402BB38,"To begin with some positive aspects to driving these cars include, using half the the fuel of todays cars, driven more than half a million miles without a crash, and protect from danger. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+08be5af2db06,DECAE402BB38,"These driverless claim to use less gas than any other car which would make it more flexible. Without using gas these cars would most likely be using electricity which does lower the pollution levels, this is a positive change. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+6930c5951a8a,DECAE402BB38,But by using electricity it will likely increase payments in electricity which wont be good for people when paying their bills. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+94d548f52ed2,DECAE402BB38,"These cars also claim to have driven millions of miles without a crash, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+458ae5477ecf,DECAE402BB38,the negative aspect to this would be that the cars still arent truly driverless. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d911e959ac74,DECAE402BB38,I admit wreckage free driving is a really good thing ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+876b078b785f,DECAE402BB38,"but even with a non driverless car it could still be free from crashes. You cant blame crashes on the car it is the driver, so the driverless car really isnt that different from a careful driver because either way there are still wreckless drivers that could crash into you. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e665ce96c986,DECAE402BB38,"As i pointed out in the last example, this car claims to protect from danger but they cant say that for everyone. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+49bf92b590b4,DECAE402BB38,The bad drivers out there could very possibly still hit you even if you are in a driverless car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+289c5acbe8d4,DECAE402BB38,"These cars may be good for when you might hit a car while going in reverse as told in passage 5, ""sensors can apply brakes"", these sensors can stop you from hitting someone but that probably cant stop someone from hitting you ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2a46ff1dc6d9,DECAE402BB38,", yes this car sounds like a luxury claiming to protect from wreckage and drive millions of miles without crashing ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3e8eda4ce204,DECAE402BB38,"but in realitly it wont help you improve your driving skills, by buying this car you will depend mainly on this car but still have to drive it because it is not 100% driverless. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+65763f587945,DECAE402BB38,"Next,with this car there are many negative aspects that will come with it including the expensiveness, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+06a349d85356,DECAE402BB38,"not being truly driverless, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+4d3761bd1796,DECAE402BB38,the legal issues. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a6c017037a6d,DECAE402BB38,This car being driverless and all is a very expensive car to manufactur. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+4e4f19ecdd60,DECAE402BB38,"The parts themselves are very expensive to collect, as told in paragraph 6, ""radar was a deie on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars"". This radar alone is 2 hundred million dollars, that is insane considering that there are a lot more parts going into the car ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+513c90b568b9,DECAE402BB38,. Another negative aspect to this car would be the fact that this car isnt even 100% driverless. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b212d2f478dc,DECAE402BB38,"In paragraph 7 it says ""special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel"" , I mean i dont see what the point is to buy this car if it needs you took pay attention to the road at all times and keep your hands on the wheel. If you were going to have to do this why not you put your foot on the pedals as wheel and just drive a car yourself and not pay the ridiculous prices that this car will consist of. In paragraph 7 it also says ""human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires"" , if the point of this car is to be driverless then why should a human have to be alert and take over? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+37d6ce6aad85,DECAE402BB38,"In paragraph 9 it states that "" in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars"". The reason to this law is because states want to make sure that drivers, passagers, and pedestrians are safe, the law, makers believe that safety is best     ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eaa7aadfe7b6,DEDCFAD56126,All people are entitled to an opinion ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+1489f8ad560c,DEDCFAD56126,My opinion is that community service should be required. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8c5be8d182b4,DEDCFAD56126,Some people think that community service is a waste of time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2a7b907b7c1d,DEDCFAD56126,but they don't know how it can change your outlook on life. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+7b3b8efb7f78,DEDCFAD56126,"It can look good on college and job applications. If you wanted to be a teacher, you could go to a local elementary school to read or tutor children of all ages. It tells people that your dedicated to your job. Little things like this can do wonders. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1602c7c75b29,DEDCFAD56126,Community service also builds life long friendships ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+59ccb8163626,DEDCFAD56126,You can meet people that are interested in the same things you are. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ca8cc8f74ac,DEDCFAD56126,You don't always have to give your life up to community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+956e20ed66d1,DEDCFAD56126,You can work at a soup kitchen at lunch or set up fund raisers for people with special needs. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+927918e78d5f,DEDCFAD56126,This also can help you conquer fears. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+02e4d9dcd80c,DEDCFAD56126,With friends that you trust on your side you can conquer anything. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e458bdbec7ed,DEDCFAD56126,but they don't know how fulfilled you feel after you help. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0051bfde3b9d,DEDCFAD56126,"It also shows many people that their lucky not to be living in homeless shelter or begging for food on the streets. It makes them think twice before taking everything for themselves. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53b563f24e91,DEDCFAD56126,It also shows skills that they didn't think they were capable to do. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f2d1bef7daf7,DEDCFAD56126,This is why i believe Community service should be required. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+12eae018cb32,DEEAFEA856D5,Im in favor of keeping the electoral college. This process might take a while but not as much as election by popular votes for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+838f9289a51f,DEEAFEA856D5,"The election by popular vote is saying that the electoral college is unfair, outdated and irrational ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+70449d837554,DEEAFEA856D5,"Well I think its not, it's widely regarded as a thing that seems to belong to the past but also not to fit in the president. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+9e39d885e731,DEEAFEA856D5,"The electors are the ones who elect for the president not the people. When we vote for a presidential candidate we're basically voting for a slate of electors. The residents of the other regions are most likely feel that their votes don't count and that the new president will have no intersts, also that he really isn't  their president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c67f85c8272e,DEEAFEA856D5,Keeping the electoral college is the best idea. Some people might not like it but some would. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+70c1f1fc43ed,DEEAFEA856D5,"Others might not like the idea of voting by popular votes for who can be president. Also under the amendment of the constituation, the district of Columbia is allocated three elctors and treated like a state of purposes of the electral college. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Unlike the others. They just vote by how big the state is and by how many repesenitives there are. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+79f4e2bd2e4d,DEEAFEA856D5,The electors are picked by depending on the states which makes it fair enough. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+96bc9be9d2dd,DEEAFEA856D5,"Back then the louisiana legislature barley succeeded in getting rid of and getting new democratic electors. If the election was a tie it would be handed over to the house of representatives, where state delegations vote on the president beacuse each state casts olny one vote. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24484db2e3a7,DEEAFEA856D5,The winner of the take all method of awarding electral votes as a couples years ago. Election focuses their campagin efforts on toss up states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23ea710665f1,DEEAFEA856D5,"the voters in the toss up states are more likey to pay attention to the campaign, knowing their going to decide the elections. but the most thoughtful voters should be the ones the decides the elections not the electors.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3b96a1a4a0ab,DEFEAAC01F83,"I think that it's a good idea, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+194d461376e2,DEFEAAC01F83,it will make the students work harder to improve their grades ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c1510b2c57c1,DEFEAAC01F83,will be a good way for the students to study more and to do better in school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6625f468a708,DEFEAAC01F83,If their grades are to low to do any sports then they need to at least a B to do sports and if they have lower then they will just have to try harder or do better next time. It might get more people to get better grades and maybe more students to join sports ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+53185950a010,DEFEAAC01F83,but they might also not want to do sports because of their grades ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+71fd2c01c71a,DEFEAAC01F83,if they can't get better grades then they can't play ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d776512cba38,DEFEAAC01F83,"Many students want to do sports and many don't, and some just don't care. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5e097126a03,DEFEAAC01F83,"For the people that struggle with work and grades and all they get are C' s then they won't be able to do sports, and if you change the school's policy now they that might jeopardise other people that wanted to join sports from playing those sports and people that have worked their butt off to do these sports that now can't play because of their grades will mean that they did all that hard work for nothing, and that they will have to do something else that will suite them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e2ba6f61992,DEFEAAC01F83,So I don't know if it is such a great idea to change the policy and make it so you need at least a B ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2eacc316ac56,DEFEAAC01F83,maybe people will like the idea of it and maybe they won't but sometimes people go through with things that they disagree on and sometimes they like it after they do it and succeed then they'll think differently about your policy and they might still dislike it ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cd4ad22e035c,DEFEAAC01F83,So I would have to say that I agree and disagree with your new policy ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b55b10431332,DF4EFA9A98D7,"Some people don't like the electoral college, whie some people do. The electoral college is a process, the founding fathers established in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President byh a vote in congress and election of presidentts but popular vote. The process is the selection of electors, the meeting with the presideng and vice, and the counting of the electoral votes. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+21abb2f67a8e,DF4EFA9A98D7,The Electoral college is unfair ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ee3410cb5be,DF4EFA9A98D7,and practical ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+face8bf21dbb,DF4EFA9A98D7,the election of the popular vote should get the president due to the swing states ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+23aa8c7f090e,DF4EFA9A98D7,They should favor in changing to the election by popular votes got the president the of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+54f04464a045,DF4EFA9A98D7,They should favor in changing the election by popular vote since the electoral college is unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20d056fe2763,DF4EFA9A98D7,It is unfair because is regraded as a non-demcratic method of selecting a president. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f72a810e5845,DF4EFA9A98D7,It should be overulled by declaring the candidate that recieves the most popular votes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9573c416481d,DF4EFA9A98D7,"For example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of popular votes compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romney. It is possible that the winner of electoral will not win due to the national popular vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8351a5336c48,DF4EFA9A98D7,The should favor in changing th election by popular vote since the electoral college is practical. It is practical because they avoid problems in the election. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+377434c5896c,DF4EFA9A98D7,The arguments in favor mostly assertions without much basis in reality and the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d5463e5c7e0d,DF4EFA9A98D7,"Also, the electoral college avoids the problem in election. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+63f78c1b4cc0,DF4EFA9A98D7,"They avoid the problems in the election which no candidate recieves a majoriy of the votes cast. For example, Nixion and Clinton both had 43 percent plurality of popular votes. There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority vote, that pressure greatly complicates the presidential process. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+77f433e3f933,DF4EFA9A98D7,They should favor in changing the election by popular votes since there are swing states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5722cc4c7d00,DF4EFA9A98D7,"In swing states there are thoughtful votes. the winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates to focus their campaign efforts on the toss up states. They mostly focus on the swing states. The toss up states pay more attention to the campaign, realling listening to the competing candidates. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+72b7545b3513,DF4EFA9A98D7,The electoral college is unfair to votes because the winner take all system in each state ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bedc739b34f6,DF4EFA9A98D7,"all candidates dont spend much time in states knowing they will not have a chance at winning. (
+
+Richard A. Posner, 3) Swing states line 20) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+55256b1631a0,DF4EFA9A98D7,"In conclusion, they should favor in changing to the election by popular votes got the president the of the United States because the Electoral college is unfair and practical, while the election of the popular vote should get the president due to the swing states.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eaaff1b4ea7f,DF74CC717BFF,"Dear Mr Sentor Of Flordia.
+
+The land of the free, the beauty, and streets paved with gold. Thats what people think of this amazing country. The Systems we have here works even know we get insults from around that world. USA changed the world. Back a long time ago back when the application mountains was the border, this land was govered wrongly. It was a long and painful war, alot of blood was spilled, alot of tears were shed. but our for fathers founded this counrty right. Since then changes were made in our laws that helped this courty, but we should never change this goverment. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8ab45e167f60,DF74CC717BFF,"I love the Electoral collage system, i cant believe anyone would want to chage or modife it. I think this is the perfect way. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+b324ad6dfde8,DF74CC717BFF,"With the Eletronal Collage there are never a cerntain region i nthe courty that ets left out. For explame the south and north and every other place gets the same amout. ALso there always going to be an out come for the vote. The more popular a stat has the more votes it gets, so big it cause stats to egt more people coming. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6cb989a887b1,DF74CC717BFF,"Fanily There arw no run off elections thank god for that. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b6c49747f939,DF74CC717BFF,Thats why i believe we should keep Eletronical Collage.    ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+85d8cbe59b40,DFB9E05148CD,"Students should be able to do community service, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+ea8b45a2280d,DFB9E05148CD,its great for the community and their moral caricature. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+defd18accd0d,DFB9E05148CD,"for example say someone wishes to clean up the trash polluting the community and the land around it in this case the service is needed its good for the community, the school, and the wild-life. Or if their going to help out at a shelter or a church, the service is needed greatly for the homeless, animals, and elderly. And the school which is part of the community should help with donations, food drives, and clothing banks. community service is greatly needed everywhere, since others cant do it by themselves its best to give are neighbors a had every once in a while. That's why we need community service its good for the community and school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+491f5569e6fa,DFB9E05148CD,And if we didn't have community service then the community would be devastated. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8b791a59598b,DFB9E05148CD,"Trash would clutter lots, homeless people and animals would have nowhere to go and the elderly wouldn't get the assistance they need like when some one walks them down the street. or helps them up or down stairs. with out the community's help many people and animals would suffer or go with out. And that could hurt a community very badly. And it pains most students to see these poor people and innocent animals suffer or have to live in such filthy conditions. that's why we ask for community service it makes the community and are self's feel better. So why don't you allow the children who want to help, help. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ad52ff54a284,DFB9E05148CD,and those who don't give it to them as a punishment. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e0cb5d5d45b6,DFB9E05148CD,"detention wont teach them their lesson but a couple of hours picking up trash will. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d6f655482c78,DFD135E81E40,The election is an very imoportant thing that everyone really needs to pay attention to it can interfere with us or it can be a good thing for some people. we should not vote for the person wants to make our lifes difficult and miserable and want to take away things like medical insurance and weak for a new born. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+62f137f23768,DFD135E81E40,"To start off with,we should not just pick a random person who looks like there going to be a good president of a good vice president. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+282efe2ea372,DFD135E81E40,"In source 3 it says that,""It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-Democrats in texas."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f1726185403,DFD135E81E40,"At most basic level,the electoral college is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b31c8cea561c,DFD135E81E40,"because of the winner take all system in each state,candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. The electoral college is unfair ,outdated,and irrational. we dont want segregation in the state,it casually states that,""segregationist in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+98280d7db6cb,DFD135E81E40,"To conclude my essay,we should not let any person win all votes and turn everything around for people. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+dcd6113dad9c,DFD135E81E40,"if the electoral college avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast then i agree to keep electoral college, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+90292f34cf9d,DFD135E81E40,it needs to help not cause any confusion and not take away important needs in life ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+458e2c7515ce,DFD135E81E40,"I just want end my essay off with an quote ""if anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency i the hands of a few swing voters in ohio, they have yet to make it....    ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7ed32dd6818d,DFF14B9DA264,"Though driverless cars may be a thing of the future, my vote is a no. Driverless cars are a bad idea no matter who is behind the wheel. ",Position,Effective,,,
+c7a2790c0100,DFF14B9DA264,Not only are the drivers put at risk but other people on the roads are put in grave danger when a human is not controlling the vehicle. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d697b90bf4a2,DFF14B9DA264,Driverless cars may appeal to the younger generation because of the flahy technology ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+754a8ed3749f,DFF14B9DA264,but the lack of safety tips the scales towards the negative side. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+e3ba50c63cb4,DFF14B9DA264,A driverless car's name portrays the idea that humans do not need to be in control of the car that idea is incorrect. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9df415be34fd,DFF14B9DA264,"Drivers must stay allert and focused while in a driverless car. This is evident when the text states,""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents."" (7) This is concerning because people today tend to get distracted while driving a normal car. If the actual driving factor is taken away, drivers could get distracted by almost anything from technology to falling asleep. This would result in serious fatality to not only th person behind the wheel but to people around them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a34e2f79878,DFF14B9DA264,"In addition, the new entertainment systems in a car may be a new and alien experiance, they point to a rough road ahead. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6688bb074099,DFF14B9DA264,"In an attempt to get the driver to pay attention while driving a driverless car, entertainment systems may be inserted in the car. This is pointed out when the text says,""Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays."" (8) Though these systems may keep the driver engaged, when it is time to take over the shift from watching or listening to a system to driving a car may take an extended period of time. The driver would also need to gain a sense of where he or she is while driving in order to take control. This would result in an increase in accident on the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+221fa66e1ec7,DFF14B9DA264,No one is perfect and accidents do happen but in a driverless car who is to blame? This issue could cause serious law cases and court battles over injuries or damages indured in a crash with a driverless car. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ff9fd59f2bdd,DFF14B9DA264,"The article suggestd this when the text says,""If the technology fails and someone is inhured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?"" (9) Not only does the confusion on who is to blame take immense time, it sucks thousands of dollars from the participants in a law suit. Though the court may rule otherwise, the accident could be a result of malfunctioning technology that can not be pinned to an individual. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1dec031595f,DFF14B9DA264,"On the other hand, driverless cars have multiple downsides, some aspects are clear improvements from automobiles today. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+09c77e255b35,DFF14B9DA264,"The new sensor techology inserted into the driverless cars can improve braking and response to sudden stops. The author includes this in the arguement when they say,""The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone."" (5) This would decrease the amount of damages done to cars from running into or backing over things because the sensors have eyes where the driver does not. The sensors can provide an advantage to safe driving that would not come from any ordinary car. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+61f4a1853d44,DFF14B9DA264,"All in all, driverless cars are unsafe and an illogical invention. The lack of attention that is needed when not driving a car will result in mass accidents and injuries when a driver is needed. Entertainment systems in cars only add to the danger in driverless cars and are unnecessary. Crashes and accidents can not be settled or avenged in court because there is no clear cause to the incident. Though the sensor technology incorporated in the driverless cars gives an advantage for braking and controling the vehicle, the bad outweighs the good in this situation. Driverless cars may be a thing of the future but as of right now, humans are not ready to hit the road without a person behind the wheel. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+37b7a27aa04e,E068A1BBFE50,I think the Electoral College should be changed to popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cdf5ee6051ee,E068A1BBFE50,because we have a lot of close presedential race nowadays. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d72bcfe80e31,E068A1BBFE50,"We also need to change the voting system because candidates are focusing on the ""swing states"" instead of all the states in the U.S.A ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+715354e4c1e5,E068A1BBFE50,"We also have the problem where one candidate can win the Electoral College and the other candidate can win the popular vote. It happened in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1e59c63f7ef2,E068A1BBFE50,If we get rid of the Electoral College then we won't have to deal with people stressing about the candidate who should've won and the candidate who actually won. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4c36a559af1,E068A1BBFE50,"
+I would rather have my vote be counted towards the president that I picked instead of electors who might pick that person. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ba8fb10e8c0,E068A1BBFE50,"If I live in a democratic state and I'm Republican, then my vote is most likely not going to count because the electors are going to vote for the other president since the state is known to be a democratic state. Then we wonder why people don't vote; it's mostly because they know which candidate is going to win that state. With popular vote , nobody knows who will win the presidency because all 50 states have equal representation. No one state will be greater than the other. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+38d9dbb3c9aa,E068A1BBFE50,"""A Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after AL Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election,"" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+03893f91baf1,E068A1BBFE50,people are already thinking about having the direct election rather than the Electoral College. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7a14692795b4,E06960D4A6C1,"With all the problems affiliated with the Electoral College, I believe that the United States should do away with the process. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a98883d3269e,E06960D4A6C1,This process by which the president is elected is unfair to those of us who are old enough to vote and understand politics ,Claim,Effective,,,
+1d254ce796a6,E06960D4A6C1,Another disadvantage is that the system of Electoral College is very confusing to many people. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0db5983aa10f,E06960D4A6C1,"Men who are running for a spot as a presidental candidate are not voted for by the citizens of that state. They have to gain supporters who then become the electors. Then the people of that state have to vote for the electors, not the person to become a presidental candidate. Voters can't even directly vote for who they want. What if you vote for a slate of electors, who are supposed to be in favor of the presidnetal candidate you want, but don't vote for him? What happens then? Presidental candidates who should actually get a chance at running for president because they didn't get enough electoral votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+28fc89a9e692,E06960D4A6C1,"As stated in an article by Bradford Plumer, ""... Al Gore ---thanks to the quirks of the electoral college---won the popular vote but lost the presidency."" The person running for president should be voted for directly by the voters. Someone, such as Al Gore, can get enough of the popular votes, but not enough of the electoral votes becuase they can't swing the votes in some states. This basically means that the majority of the United States would like to have Al Gore as a president, but couldn't because the majority of people in a state didn't want him as president. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c4e26f62cef7,E06960D4A6C1,"To sum it up, the Electoral College should be eliminated from the presidental voting process. People should just directly vote for who they want as president and see where it goes from there. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3243c1a25077,E0737CDC1E99,I favor of keeping the electoral college instead of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States because it is fair. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0f4439ae15c2,E0737CDC1E99,"Everyone see's something different in a president, we will see good and bad things. There are five very good reasons why we should keep our despised methode of choosing the president, which is known as the electoral college ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a08a38243f95,E0737CDC1E99,Certainty of outcome: A dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible-it happend in 2000-but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular group. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d93e55b5c4d2,E0737CDC1E99,"For example in 2012's election Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4f4d8ae696ea,E0737CDC1E99,Everyone's president: ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+93bffdb6088e,E0737CDC1E99,"The residents of the other region are likely to feel that their votes to not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61e2cf7e22be,E0737CDC1E99,Swing states: The winner takes all methode of awarding electoral votes induces candidates ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b6d238e27b84,E0737CDC1E99,as we saw in 2012's election-to focus their r compaign efforts on the toss-up states...voters in toss up states are more likely to pay close attention to the compaign. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3a1a49d0894,E0737CDC1E99,Big states: ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cf01e86afd1e,E0737CDC1E99,The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9286db8118fc,E0737CDC1E99,5. Avoid Run-Off Elections: ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+e2c8aca7ec8d,E0737CDC1E99,"It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-democrates in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the compaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+82f7e50a2f32,E0737CDC1E99,"the Electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Your state's entitled allotment of ellectors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member in the house of representatives plus two for you senators.
+
+Under the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. For this reason in the following discussion, the word ''state'' also refers to the district of Columbia. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1bbe56893c26,E0737CDC1E99,"Overall i think the Electoral College is better, one of the reasons why i think that is because you have a better chance of getting more votes.         ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+46a5364c600e,E079C8DE0D1E,"I think that students should be allowed to use there cell phones during lunch. Because it is there free time and there not in class. Cell phones shouldn't be allowed on in the classrooms, but lunch time. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+e61bf0584a04,E079C8DE0D1E,So I would have to agree with policy 1. You should allow students to bring there cell phones to school as long as there off in the classrooms. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d364d4dfb687,E079C8DE0D1E,Just in case there is an emergency after school while walking home or waiting for your parents to get them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e899bca6dca,E079C8DE0D1E,"Students should also be allowed to have them on after school even though it still on school grounds. You the principal or vice principal should allow cell phones on during lunch time, because the students are not bothering anybody it is there free time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+294f3e9c1469,E079C8DE0D1E,"We just maybe want to listen to music, play games, text, or call people on our cell phones ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ed6dfa5419a,E079C8DE0D1E,I honestly believe that it is really not fair that the teachers take away our cell phones while there out during free time or some other activity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bc19cce93f7,E079C8DE0D1E,"Even if your at volleyball tryout's they should be allowed because you're not inside the classrooms disturbing other students your enjoying your own time. Others just want time of there own as they can during school hours, just get a break from all the homework or class work they have to do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c697af6a8a8,E079C8DE0D1E,Just for 40 minutes (lunch) of our day we want to use our cellular device. Everyone should have a chance at least every other Friday to have there cell phones on during lunch time. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e78a8b9c0dda,E079C8DE0D1E,"probably more students would get better grades in English, Math, History, or Science if you allowed this opportunity to have cell phones out during lunch periods. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7cf58fc64184,E09064F496DF,I am in favor of getting rid of the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9dce43bd00ee,E09064F496DF,"First of all, even if a candidate wins the most popular votes, they could still lose the election, which is not fair. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind that we have now. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e9f52f7c925,E09064F496DF,"The Electoral college is confusing to many, and voters can even get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d681aa8331f,E09064F496DF,there could always be a tie in the electoral vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c66f730f6ceb,E09064F496DF,"If that were to happen then the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where people in the state would decide on the president. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0333e420f20f,E09064F496DF,The electoral college is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb6173b305d8,E09064F496DF,"Candidates spend time on ""swing"" states and not on the states that they have no chance of winning. According to the Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong article, the electoral college is ""unfair, outdated, and irrational."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1b57aa8476d,E09064F496DF,"In conclusion, the electoral college should be abolished. It is confusing, unfair, irrational, and the many people want it to change. The voting process should depend on the voice of the people, but with the electoral college, some of these voices have been taken.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+c81956702dee,E09853233CCF,Voting. Voting is a pretty big deal that only comes around so many years. And with voting the citizens of the U.S. have a voice. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+62c0d825f790,E09853233CCF,And also the voting method in which the president is elected by popular votes is just fine and it should be the only way people vote for their president. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6a148de8bc4e,E09853233CCF,No one else should vote for them. The people have the right to choose who ever they want. And no one has the right to vote for any other person but them ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1273df757170,E09853233CCF,The popular is just fine because first of all the popular vote for president method is more fair than the electoral college voting method. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7817f051d8a,E09853233CCF,"Secondly, the popular vote for president is less complicated, where as the electoral college can cause complications and problems. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0e8a90e3ce95,E09853233CCF,"First, there really is no way of cheating in the popular vote method because people vote once for whom ever they want to be president out of the people elected and then the president is chosen that way. The popular votes method is more fair because candidates spend a little time in every if not majority of the states, depending on how much time they have. But as stated in the article written by Bradford Plumer in the electoral college voting method ""candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states."" That is not fair every state should be able to see the candidates who are going to be serving the country and see what they are like and how they can help the country. And this has happened before where the candidates didn't even bother showing up in some of the states. One example would be as stated in the article By Bradford Plumer ""during the 2000 campaign, seventeeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad."" Now how on earth can people vote for their new president if they have absoloutley no idea of what the president is capable of doing to help or even hurt the country. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bf754e987110,E09853233CCF,"With the popular vote it is pretty straight forward and simple. The people vote for whom ever they want to be their next president and serve the country, the votes get counted up and whoever has the most votes gets to be the new president. But with the electoral college if a tie had occured as stated in the article written by Bradford Plumer ""the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.(The Senate would choose the vice-president.) Because each state casts only one vote, the single from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters."" Now that sure seems to be complicated. Just one vote represents 500,000 or 35 million voters. The popular vote method is a lot more simple it doesn't require all of these steps. With the popular vote everyone votes and the majority of the votes is the winner, as simple as that. It doesn't require going to the representatives who vote for themselves and a whole bunch of other people as well. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f69e4884d85,E09853233CCF,"In conclusion, the popular vote method is better because it is more fair. It gives people a voice to choose for whom ever they want not what anybody else wants. Also, the popular vote method is a whole lot less complicated than the electoral college. Where if there is a tie the representatives vote for themselves and are also representing thousands of other people who may or may not want that specific candidate to be president. So voting is no joke it is serious and it shouldn't be taken as a joke either. Every person should have a voice they should be able  to vote for who ever they desire. No one else should be able to vote for them, not even the representatives. Voting is no joke.     ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+1836ac2d90d0,E0A3FC64B7D3,"The Electrical College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of a President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+13ee6e4c0fc8,E0A3FC64B7D3,"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. Our state's entitled allotmeant of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for our Senators.
+
+Each candidate running for President in our state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidiate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. Most states have a ""Winner-take-all
+
+"" system that awards al electors to the winning presidential candidate. However, Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of ""proportional representation.""
+
+What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college! They're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the President, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the President. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central commitee, sometimes the Presidential candidates themselves. The single best argument against the electoral college is what they might call the disaster factor. Perhaps most worrying is the prospct of a tie in the electoral vote. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.
+
+The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anarchronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a President and ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense. It is the electors who elect the the President, nort the people. When you vote for a Presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Yet this has happened very rarely. It happend in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888. There are 5
+
+reasons for retaining the Electoral College despite its lack of Democratic pedigree
+
+Certainty of Outcome
+
+Everyone's President
+
+Swing States
+
+Big Sates
+
+Avoid Run-Off Elections        ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+474c79f4b9cd,E0CD80A39381,"very four years there is an election.  The election is used to decide who our president will be for the next four years.  The Electoral College is currently being used for our elections.  The articles ""Does the Electoral College Work?"" and ""In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President"" by Richard Posner believes the Electoral College should continue to stay in use.  On the other hand, the article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" by Bradford Plumer believes that the Electoral College should be removed from the system of electing the President. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+8c4ff274c09e,E0CD80A39381,"While the Electoral College has been in use for a majority of the time, it is time to start a different process called popular vote. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+06121698d33f,E0CD80A39381,The Electoral College has been in place for many years and has produced good results.  One good thing the Electoral College does is it prevents a candidate from becoming President if they only have regional appeal.  ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+b4226632e430,E0CD80A39381,"This is crutial because ""a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president"" (Posner).  With the Electoral College in place it makes it impossible to for a candidate with only regional appeal to become president because no region has enough electoral votes to elect them ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+810bfb08630c,E0CD80A39381,"Another helpful thing the Electoral College does is it has a certainty of outcome, so it is less likely for disputes than popular votes.  ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c6ec4baeca92,E0CD80A39381,"It is less likely for disputes because ""the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote"" (Posner).  Even if a state has a few more votes for the Electoral College it still creates a huge victory.  ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c63d66b59ff9,E0CD80A39381,"Even though the Electoral College has produces some good results, presidents being elected through popular vote will be better, more efficient, and more equal. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+543f2e5a6dca,E0CD80A39381,"Again, the popular vote will be more fair.  It will be more fair because a president with more popular votes will win.  In the Electoral College, a candidate with the most popular votes does not ensure victory because the other candidate may have more electoral votes.  ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1c5af9a0c6f3,E0CD80A39381,"his happened in 2000 when Al Gore got more popular votes, but lost the presidency (Plumer).  The Electoral College is not fair to the citizens of this country and to the candidates.  If more people prefer one candidate over the other, then the president should clearly clearly be them. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ecefbbed176f,E0CD80A39381,"The Electoral College is also not fair because if there is a tie, then the vote goes to the House of Representatives.  ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3beb79ab6b4f,E0CD80A39381,"The House of Representatives' ""selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people"" (Plumer).  The majority of the House of Representatives is Republicans, so the president elected will be reflected by that, and it will not give the Democrats equal representation.  All in all, popular vote should be used to determine the President because it is a more fair and an equal way to do so. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d9a3997e1f0f,E0CD80A39381,"
+Equally important, popular vote should be used to elect the President because then candidates and voters will pay attention to the campaign.  With the Electoral College candidates only spend time trying to win the votes of the ""swing states.""  ",Claim,Effective,,,
+c58eb2967b3c,E0CD80A39381,"They will not pay attention to the states that they already know have their vote.  In fact, in the 2000 campaign, there were seventeen states that the candidates never visited.  Two of those are Rhode Island and South Carolina (Plumer).  Every state should be able to see the candidates so the voters get to really know who they are voting for, so they will make a better decision.  ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+080a3143a78e,E0CD80A39381,"Also, with the Electoral College people in states that know their vote will not matter will not pay attention to the campaign.  ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ab925a3b163,E0CD80A39381,"A person such as, a ""Republican in California... have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote"" (Posner).  Everyones opinion should matter and should be taken into account when electing the President.  ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f909df790d54,E0CD80A39381,"To summarize, popular vote is the only way to ensure that the voters get all the knowledge they need to elect the President, and so that everyone's vote matters. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b944334fb234,E0ED571AED2A,I am aware that you are aware that some kids from our school are debating wether to do community service or not. I would highly encourage you to help these boys see the benefit in doing this. I know for a fact that I am doing this to better our community and our school. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+4fd761f4aea2,E0ED571AED2A,"I don't recommend that you should require kids to do this I'm just saying that you should get kids who want to help, come and help. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+2c65875536f2,E0ED571AED2A,I believe that kids in 7th to 12th grade should learn how to do service ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f7da74ef5f5,E0ED571AED2A,When people hear the words Community Service I believe that they think of being in trouble (some times it is getting in trouble). ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6c0794234328,E0ED571AED2A,"l think that by doing a good service to the community will be good to our school, especially friends, and families that help serve in the community. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+953a3d15c6f9,E0ED571AED2A,"I believe that the people who work in the police department and as the fire squad should have a day off once every two months so that kids that are my age can help out too. I would advise you to help kids get in the act in helping, there's kids out there that know how to help but they just refuse to help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f85dd3c1df4,E0ED571AED2A,lf you know what I'm saying then you should help me get friends to do this with me and hopefully some of the people in my ward. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d8bf831ba1a,E0FAD617D3BF,The electoral college must go down ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+8db5d88389e7,E0FAD617D3BF,The electoral college is unfair to voters across the United States and the amounts of electoral votes doesn't compare to the actual population ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6c4ed8727e22,E0FAD617D3BF,The electoral college have messed up the voting system causing horrific crisis in the United States. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0c20b181a450,E0FAD617D3BF,"This system of electoral colleges voting for the president and not actually counting the votes that the people in the United States vote for, which makes it a very outdated system ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1fdabc787f09,E0FAD617D3BF,Using popular vote is more precise and accurate than the electoral college. Popular vote is voted by citizens in which many people not including me should change the electoral system for the popular vote system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c65c058cee98,E0FAD617D3BF,the electoral college must go down and replaced by a system called the popular vote to determine the president of this great country. ,Position,Effective,,,
+111bbce0781e,E0FAD617D3BF,Having electoral voters instead of having the popular vote system is unfair to all. Basically the electoral college process consists of only a selection of the senators. The founding father have established this messed  up system in which it compromise between the election of the president by a vote in congress. It is highly unfair because of the winner-take-all system in each state. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ca0ba5d246b8,E0FAD617D3BF,"This means canidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. For example, they only focus on the ""swing states"" like California. Using the winner-take-all system, smaller states don't get the same oppurtunity as bigger states as in the year of the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see any canidates at all including, Rhode Island and South Carolina which holds the largest media markets. Yet these states didn't get to see a single campaign ad in the designated area. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c1024a3af3af,E0FAD617D3BF,"Not only that using this system is unfair to all, but this system of electoral votes don't compare to the population ",Claim,Effective,,,
+57a4bea06e6e,E0FAD617D3BF,"Meaning the 500,000 voters in a state of Wyoming who wants the other president to win, only have one representative to cast that vote in that whole state of that immense population. While California in the other hand have 55 representatives to cast the votes, in which the represent 35 million voters in that state. Using popular vote, is much more of a precise method or sytem to use. Instead of having one representative from one small state of 500,000 people, the popular votes turned in by qualified citizens will count than just 55 representatives. Imagine having each and everyone's vote count instead of having someone to do it for you. Now that is when people should start voting ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+02523d6d3c19,E0FAD617D3BF,Using the popular vote will indeed avoid many crisis that happened using the electoral system ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b394b09a5a3f,E0FAD617D3BF,"For example, the election that almost turned into complete disaster in the year of 1960 when Vice President Richard Nixon, who was presiding over the senate, validated only his opponent electors, but he made sure to do so ""without establishing a precedent"". This couldv'e been easily fixed if the government at this time would take off the electoral system college and instead use a precise system that many people want, named the popular vote. Popular vote is basically when the people have ""the voice"" and speak for themselves and not to another person ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a71fbd738742,E0FAD617D3BF,"Another example would be in the year 2000 when U.S. presidential race, Al Gorereceived more individual votes that George W. Bush nation wide, but Bush wonthe election, receiving 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266. With popular vote, Al Gore wouldv'e won the presidency and the citezens of the United States would've gotten what they wanted instead of having people vote for them. This is why population vote should be in effect as soon as possible. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19dffd5bb497,E0FAD617D3BF,Using popular vote would be a great and ideal way to decide who is the president during the nationwide election ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+40399887a9e7,E0FAD617D3BF,It should be important to many people as we the people of the United States decide who will take over the countries' responsibility and economy ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+43615c243a76,E0FAD617D3BF,but having electoral colleges will avoid run-off elections. Run-off elections are when no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+328b2e657b2b,E0FAD617D3BF,"However, they can fix this problem by eliminating the electoral votes process ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ef579f8ff753,E0FAD617D3BF,"Having popular votes system will be arguably the best system to use for the election and towards the voting process. Using electoral votes will be unfair to voters when they are voting because of the simply winner-take-all basis of each and every one of the fifty states. Not only that it's unfair, it also causes many crisis in the United States dealing with this system alone and then eventually lead to dramatic chaos across the nation. Also, having the amount of electoral votes doesn't compare to the population of the actual state. Remember it is still one representative for the 500,000 people in Wyoming. Popular votes should be used in every political system no matter what situation it is. As the passage says, the argument against direct elections are spuriors at the best. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9210c20f06c7,E12450BAE343,Would it be surprising to know that kids learning at home helps them not stress out as much? Stress is mainly caused by student getting to much school work that cannot all be handied in on night. Every day kids complain about having too much homework and when working at home there is not any homework. Allowing children to work on their own schedule helps them become more motivated to work. Students being educated at school gaing more freedom to create their own schedule and their own rules ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+a703695c248d,E12450BAE343,Learning at home and not at schools helps kids succeeed and have better grades. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4a37bc15d483,E12450BAE343,"One of the best thing about homeschooling is that it can be done at anytime, and anywhere ",Claim,Effective,,,
+944e9b40d9d1,E12450BAE343,Children have a flexible time schedule which means that the parents can help. The students can work around the parents schedule instead of the parents working around the student's schedule. Some students have a trouble working at a school because they cannot understand the material at the pase set by teachers. Homeschooling allows students to work at their own pace and on their own schedule. Another thing about homerschooling is that there are no misguided rules about technology or how to dress. This is good because instead of worrying about the rules. The students can focus on their studies. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+99b149204f88,E12450BAE343,When you are taking a test or taking notes at a public school there are many distractions that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. This is another reason that learning from home would benefit students ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cbeaf9050cb6,E12450BAE343,Learning from home won't have the distractions that a classroom has ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+66a339724f4d,E12450BAE343,"As a result of this, students won't lose focus on the work they are doing and get better grades. One of the reasons students get distracted in the first place is because they are in an environment their are not familiar with, which makes the feel uncomfortable. If a students learns from home they will feel more relaxed and confortable and won't stress about work. In a school, you are struck at desk for 6 hours and have a limited time to eat and limited bathroom breaks. This is not help a student's learning at all ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1d737d322b5d,E12450BAE343,On the other hand. If you are at home you can eat and do whatever you want when you want. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+e4ec5695d136,E12450BAE343,There are still a few reasons not to do distanced learning. There are many more opportunities with public schools ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+555e1da9e260,E12450BAE343,"People from different colleges don't go to students'homes and try to advertise their career options. Making friends from home would be difficult without social interaction. Public school are great places to socialize during free time. If everyone goes home to attend school funding for public schooling willl fall and teachers will lose their jobs because of buged cuts. In public schools, depending an the teachers, cheating is hard to do. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ef8e73db2478,E12450BAE343,"My conclusion is students should be offered classes online or at home because the environment is less distracting, which could be less stressful. At home there are less distractions, rather than at school where there are many different thing to students, can greatly affect the quality of a student's work. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+137b277333ba,E129081F8EB2,This letter is about the cell phone policy ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+5fa879db6c62,E129081F8EB2,"the policy I would consider to use would be the policy number one. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+d084282a6808,E129081F8EB2,"I believe the policy is good making phone calls checking on others, talking to friends or family and texting to friends is good ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b4ccbcdf3a07,E129081F8EB2,but I would make a few changes to it the first thing I would change about it would be during class teachers or staff should check the phones to see if they are turned off. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d9139d70fb19,E129081F8EB2,"The other thing I would change about is, teachers and staff should keep watch on their students if they are using their cell-phone in class because sometimes they cannot be trusted. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+68a19797a904,E129081F8EB2,I would still consider the policy of number one just make these few changes to it. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3bc6c59810b1,E14206F97D20,he elecoral collage should stay the same because it worked this long right and it will keep working as long as everythis is fair. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6ae0e6a261fa,E14206F97D20,The country is based on our votes and that is how it should be because we are part of this country and we make it a free country. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0229aeb68001,E14206F97D20,This is how our founding fathers stated this country and thats how it need to be our country has the best presedent that we could have in this type of situation because he is a colored man and there is nothing wrong with that. If we did not have an electoral collage it would be harded to keep things in line such as how the voting works and how it should be decided that we have the best presedent we can get at that time for our country. As an example we have been fighting on Iran and alfaganastan for a long time and presedent oboma did the best he could with the best that he had to make sure that we were still a free country and the we were safe from terrorism. The electoral collage was a good iead and still is so thst way we do always have a good presedent or for anything that this country need to vote on it always keeps thing in order and fair to this country so there for it is what this country need in order to make the best we can with the best we got.    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7927d8a4ac9e,E1464913F4ED,I feel that students should have to do community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+562e34825f7c,E1464913F4ED,"Not only does community service help others but, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+112945da2d5f,E1464913F4ED,it also teaches good skills that students may use later in life. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+de7edcc6f099,E1464913F4ED,Community service also teaches students to look at the greater picture. That the world doesn't always revolve around them. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+8e243b0d39c4,E1464913F4ED,"Instead of sitting at home all weekend and playing Wii, students should go out and help their community in various ways. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b1e9964a92c8,E1464913F4ED,"For example, picking up trash in a local park will help reduce the amount of pollution. Or collecting canned goods would help feed the homeless. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9db6ae017bc8,E1464913F4ED,"Think about if every school required students do community service. That would be a lot of schools helping our country and our Earth. The community service does not have to be hard, it can be age appropriate ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a46b5189dcd5,E1464913F4ED,"If our generation starts cleaning up this world and making it a better place, I'm sure that we can teach generations after us to follow in our footsteps. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+deed3b71dc23,E1464913F4ED,"In conclusion I feel that students should have to do community service.
+
+What they ""need"" or want to do probably isn't as important as giving back to the community. The community service does not have to conflict with the students life outside of school; it can be as short as one or two hours. Which is why students have no reason why they shouldn't help.     ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+b56aada1ea80,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"Every vote makes a difference. Every single vote plays a role in electing a president, whether it be directly, or indirectly. The Electoral College has caused a lot of controversy with that thought. ""The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational."" (Plumer 14) Where are the facts behind the argument against it? We all hear people complaining and saying these things, but they have no facts as to why abolishing the Electoral College would be beneficial. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+73a45a4dc5d5,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"The Electoral College is working in the peoples' favor and i believe we should keep it. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+813b7894715e,E1BAC2DFC0BA,There are so many uneducated voters. People that vote for the presidential candidate at the top of the list because they have no clue who any of the people are anyway. If the president was selected by just popular votes who knows what the nation would be like. Every vote counts ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+91322d2d95be,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"Yes, this is true even with Electoral College it just a process to make sure that the votes being sent in are educated and well thought out; not chosen out of laziness ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf44091e6cd3,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"Do we want the people who vote just to say they voted to have a huge say in who runs our country? I sure don't. I'd rather have a trusted group of people who are very well educated take our votes into huge consideration and seal the deal. ""But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nomonee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)..."" (Posner 16). Richard A. Posner goes on to tell us how many times the trust has been betrayed... the most recent being in the election year 2000 and then the only other time the electoral vote did not reflect the popular vote was 1888. There's no reason to change a system that isn't broken. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+715c327dc7fb,E1BAC2DFC0BA,Obviously the system has its flaws ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+8f1f45922387,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"but nothing is perfect. Sure the Electoral College messed up twice, but that isn't some mass amount that was detrimental to our nation. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8f882c0a8bea,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"""The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."" (Office of the Federal Register 1) It's a compromise that has worked for so long; there's not enough valid reasons to change it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3295fc76c8f0,E1BAC2DFC0BA,The Electoral College gives the right amount of representation to different sized states. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+97f53018207f,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"""The Popular vote was very close in Florida; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes."" (Posner 21) The majority of the state was in favor of Obams's ideas so 29 Electoral votes would work in their states favor, instead of having an almost tie vote which would make a smaller difference in the outcome. The Electoral College votes are like each states individual votes for the candidate that would make the majority of that one state happy, or that would benefit that one state. So yes, the popular vote may not always win, but the outcome of the presidential election is based on which person was the favorite of the majority of each individual state. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+882f0f5ef4c3,E1BAC2DFC0BA,"All in all, the Electoral College works for this nation. It worked for our founding fathers and it's still working for us, no matter what people want to argue. If ""60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" (Plumer 9) then the majority of our country should be able to come up with a valid argument against it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3fa5ce88e606,E1C5F6D592F4,If diverless cars are in our future would it impact the way people focuse on the road? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0e207d2b5c2e,E1C5F6D592F4,I belive that driverless cars will afect peoples saftey. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+38561aa2b3b4,E1C5F6D592F4,A way that driverless cars can be a negative thing is because people are not in full control of the car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11ef614cd4d1,E1C5F6D592F4,"What would happen if the car all of a sudden starts doing something wrong and the driver can not do anything about it? In paragragh number 7 is says that the car can do a lot of things on its own. ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating through work zones and around accidence."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3cadcc38cf5f,E1C5F6D592F4,Also if people were interested in buying the diverless car would an average person be able to affort it? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+beba0fd01db2,E1C5F6D592F4,"In paragragh number 4 it clearly says that the car needs many tools and special equitment to be able to be a driverless car. ""Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an intertial motion sensor."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5198c8985d2b,E1C5F6D592F4,"Not only would the car itself cost alot, it would also take millions to be able to fix all the roads in order for the car to be able to drive on the roads ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+799d53f74581,E1C5F6D592F4,"In paragragh number 3 it states that the car requies magnets in the road to be able to read the messages in binary code, but would be too expensive. ""These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they require massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+00918a260d73,E1C5F6D592F4,"one of my biggest concerns is that if the driverless car does not need the driver at all times would it make it easier for younger kids to get in the car, start it, and take off? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ab84b8e044c,E1C5F6D592F4,"In paragragh number 7 it says that all it takes is the drivers hands to be on the wheel for the car to go. ""The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel."" Since the driverless car can do alot on its own the car could make it easy for a young child to get in it and leave while not being watched properly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0ca7c3383841,E1C5F6D592F4,"belive that people should keep driverless cars off the road for many reasons. For example, people are not having full control of the car. The car may not be afordable to the average person. It would take millions for the road to be fixed and be able to have driverless cars to work on the roads. Finally it would be seriously dangerouse for a young child to get in the car and the car start driving on its own. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3d29bb350fb0,E20123532A69,"Mr. Senator I think the presidents should be elected by populer vote. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+0ccc4542fb7d,E20123532A69,Thats how it was back when our founding fathers first came to have there frist president and thats how it should be now. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a7dcad0e48c,E20123532A69,"I mean if we're going to be judged be our peers shouldnt we be elected by them to. When it comes down to it who exactle is voting for us and can we control who we'er voting for and from the evedence shown in ""What's wrong with the electoral college"" no we can't. And no matter who are what we vote for all were doing is expressing a political preference it dosent matter at all to them what we want all they care about is what they want and what they think is best. When it my be best for them but not for the rest of us. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+325a46d9f889,E20123532A69,If we'er all going to have to live with who wins for the next four years shouldnt we all get a vote.    ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+876eb5cc1c0d,E21AE194E6C7,How do feel about driverless cars? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+e145ff2dfbb8,E21AE194E6C7,"I don't really like the idea, but it's for the future and anything is possible. For me driverless cars has it's pros and cons. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+e47bf6762497,E21AE194E6C7,"Driverless cars can be useful, but they can be deadly to other people who doesn't have the car or even be deadly to the driver. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4ba151c9f270,E21AE194E6C7,If the driverless cars will have sensors and the driver will have to have fast reaction times to help the car if needed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+37badb04bcfe,E21AE194E6C7,To me safety is more important then anything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cdb29bd4d42c,E21AE194E6C7,"Driverless cars are for the future, but anything is possible for the future. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+dd53c62beb9b,E21AE194E6C7,"There are many possible things that could happen. The car could be a succesful invention. Then again it could be a failure. Nobody wants to be in harms way right? In the passage it says "" Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020"" to me I think it will take more than four years to invent these cars and mass produce them. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4fa454bdcba,E21AE194E6C7,"New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident"" ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+318222b8134d,E21AE194E6C7,"the passage goes on and says "" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?"" What if one of the sensors become defaulted? Wouldn't that be a manufacturing problem? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d016bd4d41c,E21AE194E6C7,"Driverless cars can be useful, but could be harmful to the surroundings if the technology malfunctions. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1ec48651a64b,E21AE194E6C7,"What would you do if you was driving a driverless car and it maulfunctions and crashes into the car next to you and you find out the people in the other car are dead? Would you feel quilty or would you not? Driverless cars can be the future, but I think the inventioina and concept of the car shoukd be taken more serious. To me the maufacturers are just looking to make money.
+
+To me as a person i take safety very serious. I think the safety concept of the vehicles should be one of the more serious things the manufacturers should look at if produced. They should only give a certain amount of driverless cars out incase the technology fails. There won't be much chaos if the technology malfunctions. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6b2bf4f7de77,E21AE194E6C7,"Driverless cars are the future for the world. I don't really like the concept, but it's the future and anything is possible. Driverless cars have many pros and cons. The cars can be useful, but then they could be harmful to it's surrounding safety wise. If the driverless cars will have sensors then what's the use for the person to have to be cautious at all times for? Like i've said before I take safety very serious and I hope the maunufacturers take it more serious for the future of the ""autonomous car."" ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37c0a433d34d,E22833B1E06E,Scientists have figured out that the life like face found on Mars was just another Martian Mesa ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bb56d50d468e,E22833B1E06E,"the was common enough found around the Cydonia on Mars, but only this particular one of the most unusual rocks the made a shadow that makes it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh face. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2bc6ed1b26dc,E22833B1E06E,"The "" Huge Life like Rock Formation which makes it resemble an humans head and the formation given by the shadow of the rock gave the illusion of such a life like photograph of an humans eyes, nose, and the mouth."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+269917fa94e3,E22833B1E06E,Some people think that the photograph of the humans face found on Mars was created by alien life. Most people believe the rocks photograph of an humans face is real because they believe NASA is hiding alien life from the public meanwhile ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8357627b40de,E22833B1E06E,", the defenders for the NASA budget system wishes more than anyone that there was an ancient civilization on Mars. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+dc90bbcd706d,E22833B1E06E,"Althogh few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for the NASA when the Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in september of 1997, eighteen long years after the viking mission ended. "" We felt this was important to taxpayers,"" Cheif ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+290ee5ac60f6,E23D057A2674,"The voters of America do not vote for a president; they vote for a slate of electors who then elect a president. The Electoral College is the process of voters relying on a slate of electors to vote for the pesidential candidate of their choice, though they cannot always guarantee who the electors will vote for. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+cb79a58e193a,E23D057A2674,The Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote for the president ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a12c7a8b9da2,E23D057A2674,"it is a non-democratic method since voters do not get to vote for a president diectly, even though the outcome is almost always in the favor of the voter. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2825294938aa,E23D057A2674,"The Electoral College is a non-democratic method of voting because voters only get to vote for a slate of electors, not the president of their choice. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b7d7490e8a33,E23D057A2674,"Although it is rare for an elector to vote for the president that is not the first choice of of the people who elected him, it has happened. The Electoral College is also unfair because in the system, the ""winner takes all"". This is unfair because nominees only spend their time campaigning in the ""swing states"" that will get them the most votes. In these states, some voters know they have no chance of getting the president they wish to elect if the majority of the state chooses to elect the other candidate. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e344d2a3ec33,E23D057A2674,The Electoral College is an unfair way of voting because citizens do not have a voice in their elcetion, can only hope that their elector votes for the president of their chioce. Our Senator should change to election by popular vote so that every citizen may have a vote!    ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,
+215b20b8b8c9,E243F4B2D0FA,According to the articles and arguements given I think the most effective way to get a premeire president for our nation is vote on the behalf of the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cf5dd8d5547b,E243F4B2D0FA,In my view of the Electoral College has more experience aswell as having a sense of quality and values that they know can change the country. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a196f1a54500,E243F4B2D0FA,"If we depend on the popular vote of the country,only in the favor of the people classes and opinions of the people, it may lead to presidents that cant maintain order of his or her country.Nonethless,the votes of both Electoral College and majority vote is basically as lucky as a flip of a coin,one side may lead to ultimate failure and the depression of a country the other may lead to momentous uprising of the country,in chosing the right leader of the country.Although, based on the criteria I just created is really puzzling your mind about what president is best I believe that the Electoral College may clear things up and make the best decision in favor of the people. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+57462908b35c,E243F4B2D0FA,"Based on the articles,the Electoral College does knows best ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fe3a28e4e823,E243F4B2D0FA,"because although they lack of democratic pedigree doesnt mean there wont be democrats in the whitehouse, because they have requirements of how to find the best fit no matter what party included.Even if they were unsupportive of the democrats Romney lossed as example of equality of parties on the College's choice. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8ec7323948b9,E243F4B2D0FA,The articles also state that no popular votes determine the election of a president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9ad86547c774,E243F4B2D0FA,showing that although more than half of the population in the nation picks a candidate it wont matter unless that candidate gets a majority vot of the Electoral College aswell ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3a116cb6e214,E243F4B2D0FA,"Stating that the expierience of the College will prevail on the birth of a new president,no matter what party,no matter the odds of a popularity vote, the Electoral College is a perfect example of this nation's motto because they are truely a sign of equality between candidates that might become great presidents of our nation. 
+",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+f23224a06e45,E264A3F27D5C,The Electoral College should be removed as a way of depicting who the President should be. The idea of the Electoral College is almost great but its just not the way the President should be elected. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+95806013d782,E264A3F27D5C,"The popular vote is simple, and it makes the presedential campaigns almost mean something. The Electoral College is still a system that is effective, however, the United States government gets its power from the people, so the popular vote would be logical thing to use in depicting who the US President should be. ",Position,Effective,,,
+cb2e20304343,E264A3F27D5C,"In source two it tells us that Al Gore had won more than 60 percent of the populkar vote, but still lost the presidency because of the flaws in the Electoral system. From the knowledge that I have gained through all three of these articles, it makes no logical sense that Al Gore won the popular vote with 60 percent and still lost the presidency. All of these sources include something along the lines of, ""popular vote elects slate electors to choose president"". ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6b6aa8f3eb28,E264A3F27D5C,"with that being said, it proves a flaw in the system we use to elect the most powerful man in the world. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+178e16256921,E264A3F27D5C,"Now, yes, there is a good thing or two about the Electoral College way of doing things. For instance, as stated in source three, ""Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both ahd a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes."" ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+f2dc4ff2d8d4,E264A3F27D5C,"In a situation like this, it doesn't even matter what the popular vote results are becasue the College still gets their unique say in the presidency. However, if we got rid of the Electoral College it wouldn't matter if there was a tie in the popular votes because it could just be disputed in Congress, the same way it would be handled if there were to be a tie in the current Electoral College ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+5b2077443763,E264A3F27D5C,"In conclusion, I would just like to say that the articles given did not give me enough information for me to form an educated opinion on the prompt. However, I did my best with the articles given. I would like to also say that it would be best for the nation if the Electoral College was either revised and edited, or removed completely and replaced with popular vote in determining our nation's future leaders.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a89b8664caf9,E2669D67879F,My Principal wants to change that we must have a B average to be in any sport. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+7d90bd90f299,E2669D67879F,"My opinion is No, ",Position,Adequate,,,
+49bded4d0c8f,E2669D67879F,because a student might not get a subject therefore that student has a lower average. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+038715934d3b,E2669D67879F,It is also hard to maintain a B average when being in a sport because you are worried about both grades and that sport and also maybe things that are going on in your life. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b2d151631f4,E2669D67879F,maintaining a B average can also help you ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3d2e28d51eb4,E2669D67879F,"If you are in a sport, you say to yourself ""hey if I keep my grade to a B average, then i can stay in my sport. "" That to me is what helps most kids or teens that are in a sport . I could also see why my principal would change the grade is, because he/she has more students trying out for sports and also that he needs a good grading report from all of his students and half of his students are in a sport so that is why. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a3ea69709ea4,E2669D67879F,maintaining good grades would help a lot not just to the students but also to the school. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0d03c8a53f4d,E2669D67879F,More students need to pay more attention to school so they can be in sports. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6a8f18ee2c98,E2669D67879F,Sports is a great way for students to get a great education and to maybe someday get a scholarship to college ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0647dad83cbc,E2669D67879F,That would make me very happy if i got a scholarship to college from having great grades and for being in sport ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+afb3478b5801,E2A9D1243AF9,"Lets talk about abolishin the electoral college. When you vote, do you think you vote for the president? No. When you vote u dont vote for the president you vote for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The people of America should consider themselfs lucky that the 2000 fiasco election was the biggest election crisis in a century, says the article in setion 2. Honestly if the article syas that Bob Dole was right why even have the electoral college! ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4418c487b4aa,E2A9D1243AF9,"give the people what they want and get rid off the ""Elecotoral college. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+64815ec6d97e,E2A9D1243AF9,why have the program if we are not the once choosing who is going to be president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+601777665e5f,E2A9D1243AF9,The electors does that not the citizens they just use the votes and later they would choose who ever they want. My opinion is to take the Eletoral College away for good because is useless and pointless. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ee15b033d9ea,E2A9D1243AF9,"Five reasons why the Electora College should be restained despite its lack of democratic."" The winners takes all bases"". What is that, why would we use that. In 2012 President Obama received 61.7% of the electoral votes compared to only 51.3% of the popular votes cast for him and Romney, says in source 3: In defence of the Electoral College. My point here is that we ""DO NOT"" need the Elecoral College. The voters in presidential elections are people who wants to express a  political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1391914bb8d7,E2A9D1243AF9,"""The people in upper state are most likely to pay attention to the campain"", says the article. Why would they do that?. Because they would have resived the most information and attention there is from the candidates. They are likely to be the most thoughtful people when its comes down to voting. It says ""the most thoughtful voters should be the once to decide the election"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7fd79d7d70c2,E2A9D1243AF9,"My answer would be no, because everybody is living in the country that wants a vote from everyone so why only accept the votes that are thoughtful. ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8ba4248df5a4,E2A9D1243AF9,We are all one so we should all vote and choose who we would like as a President of the United State.                   ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+0180cf7c46f9,E2F8D4DEB501,"Many agree that driverless cars would bring many benefits to society. On the other hand, I disagree on the idea of producing driverless cars. Driverless cars will arise more problems in the upcoming future. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0ace75ecd9c5,E2F8D4DEB501,Driverless cars could cause more accidents ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ce1f14f3015e,E2F8D4DEB501,"if something goes wrong who could you blame the manufacturer or the driver, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0588d7b9c150,E2F8D4DEB501,it would just be pointless to drive places if you are not directing the way ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7229d655f21,E2F8D4DEB501,Driverless cars should not be the next invention. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+687c76966c16,E2F8D4DEB501,Accidents always happen. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+68fbb5660729,E2F8D4DEB501,"Even now when humans are driving vehicles, but if there is many accidents with humans driving imagine a car driving itself. A car does not have reflexes. Therefore, if an accident happens really quick and the sensors do not alert the driver like it should be then there goes another collision. Many things could go wrong with the sensors and could cause terrible accidents. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+743deb84b6cb,E2F8D4DEB501,In this case who could you blame for the accidents that occur with the driverless cars? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+89371bed856a,E2F8D4DEB501,"On paragraph 9, it describes safety, but there would be new laws to cover liability of an accident. The manufactures would have some fault because they invented it. It would be their fault if the sensors did not work. It also is the person driving the vehicle's fault, but not if the sensors did not warn them in time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+015ac1dc3e46,E2F8D4DEB501,Technology is making people lazier and lazier by the minute. Driverless cars will continue to make society even more lazier. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+efdae9e35fea,E2F8D4DEB501,There is absolutely no fun in getting in a car and not driving around and just waiting for something to happen so it could be your turn to drive just like it asks on paragraph 8. It would become pointless to go through all that process of getting your permit and license if you are not driving the vehicle. It would be hard to interpret driving fun in new way with driverless cars. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3ac3a99b5120,E2F8D4DEB501,"Driverless cars will bring benefits in a way, but also many complications. Accidents are most likely to occur because humans are not driving the vehicle, but the vehicle itself is driving. There would be uprises on who you can actually blame since the driver was driving but the manufacturer created it. There would be no point in getting a license if you are not driving the car. Driverless cars are going to be pointless to even own if you are not driving the car yourself.        ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+24bbe8bff0ff,E310FB5D4752,Dear State Senator you guys should consider abolishing the electoral college and keep the popular votes for president of united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e5d171aef431,E310FB5D4752,"The electoral college is unfair , outdated and also irrational. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+2a3590732fd9,E310FB5D4752,"The Electoral college is unfair because the winner take all all system in each state.
+
+The electoral college was established by the founding fathers in the constitution as a compromise etween the election of votes. The votes consist of about 538 electors. About 270 elector votes is required for president. Its not fair because other people votes dont count if 270 votes count for president election. The Electoral college is regarded because the selecting of the president should be declared by the president who which recieves the most vote ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b2702046584,E310FB5D4752,Why i think changing the election to the president with the most votes will help because its gives the president more opportunity or chance to have a fair election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+274522643c20,E310FB5D4752,"Its not fair that alot of people vote and only about half of their vote counts. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+2b6615d54f5d,E310FB5D4752,"In Conclusion I Think Changing the election to the one with the most votes will be more fair. They should also abolish the electoral votes because its unfair , outdated , and irrational for 538 people to votes and only 270 votes count toward the election on order for the president to.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f746d1e8cde6,E386654E285D,CHANGE THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE!!! The Electoral College needs to either stop or change. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+152b16c4d2ea,E386654E285D,Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f987af0537fe,E386654E285D,like the one we have today. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+43e535933809,E386654E285D,"Under this system, voters vote not for the president, but for the state of electors. which who  in turn elect the president. For example, if u lived in texas, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you dont vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to Kerry. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f1d0be17ea61,E386654E285D,Another thing is the disaster factor. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c6efb9c1df7d,E386654E285D,"The disaster factor is when the american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The system also allows for much worse. Basically the system want's to see us fail. If the system would realize how bad there hurting us and making us feel like our  vote doesn't matter. For example, again the 2000 scandle with the votes for president. We voted for this guy and he won most of the votes from the states but the Electoral College desided to give it to the other guy. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aaec1946a66d,E386654E285D,"Some of us just don't get how that works. What happen in 2000 have me to think that, maybe there are some sercet's that the us is not telling us, because they dont know  how we are going  to respond.
+
+There is probably a lot of things that would get a lot of people in trouble. What happen in the 2000 should open a lot of eyes right now. This world is so crazy today. We are trillion of doolars in debt probably because of the stupid disicions that the electoral college made on that day. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a4fd29c2c628,E386654E285D,"it said that the Electoral College is widely regarded as an Anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+194dfee1c380,E386654E285D,They say the winner takes all but the winner in 2000 didn't really win ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fadfc24c390,E386654E285D,"After reading this, i do not stand behind the electoral college.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4467eeb6fd41,E39559BF14F2,"My step sister, Generic_Name, use to do online classes from our home because she suffers from a physical illness that doesn't allow her body to produce enough blood cells. Because my step sisters body does't produce enough blood cells this effects her body to get tired very quickly. Generic_Name can't stand up for long amounts of time and can't preform as much physical activity as others. When Generic_Name preforms too much physical activity, that her body cant obtain, she will get very light-headed and feel as if she's going unconscious. If Generic_Name puts her body at too much physical risk, she could possibly have a seizure. Online classes were very beneficial for my step sister, Generic_Name, because it allowed her to be at rest when learning. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+87199777cd0a,E39559BF14F2,Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. This is a very beneficial ,Position,Effective,,,
+4993d9b3fddb,E39559BF14F2,to those who suffer any kind of mental or physical illness ,Claim,Effective,,,
+9f06fb0a9653,E39559BF14F2,to those who have a busy schedule ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2eebfa8d48df,E39559BF14F2,". Although, others believe the youth is too irresponsible to hold themselves accountable for such a tremendous responsibility, and is not beneficial for students. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+66c2f01d545c,E39559BF14F2,The opportunity for students to attend online classes or video conferencing from home can be beneficial to those who suffer any sort of mental or physical illness. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7f163713e46a,E39559BF14F2,"Both mental and physical illnesses come with a unique everyday battle, for the individuals who suffer from them. Some students suffer from mental illness's like: PTSD, Anxiety, Bipolar, and Depression. When a student suffers from a mental illness and attends a public school it can be extremely difficult to cope. Depression is a mental illness that affects someones thoughts and feelings to occur as more negative. In some cases, depression can affect someone physically. Someone who suffers from depression and attends a public school can face daily difficulties, like, getting out of bed in the morning for school and participating in class. When I was in the eighth grade, I had to transfer out of my public school, Generic_School. I transferred out of Generic_School and instead received my eighth grade education through online classes. I took online classes from home. Attending Generic_School was a difficult responsibility for me at the time because I was in a very depressive state of mind. When taking online classes and being home schooled, I had plenty of extra time to slowly pull myself out of the depressive mindset that I was suffering from. I pulled myself out of this depressive mindset, by using my extra time going to therapy and receiving medication to improve the negative thoughts and feelings that I had towards myself and life. Online classes benefited me because I learned all of the eighth grade circular that I needed to at a pace that was comfortable for me and my mental health at the time. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c17846bb2d62,E39559BF14F2,Students who take classes online or video conferencing from home can be beneficial to those who have a busier schedule. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c5613e334906,E39559BF14F2,"Some children have busier and more complicated lives compared to others. For example, some children are raised in households that their parent guardian struggles financially. When a child is raised into a financially struggling household, he or she will busy themselves by working a full-time job. A child who is raised into a household like this will work full-time because they will do anything it takes for them to be financially stable on their own in their future. A child who works a full-time job, typically doesn't have enough time out of his or hers day to attend a public school. But, he or she will have the opportunity of having extra time to prepare themselves for their future. In a hypothetical situation like this, online classes and video conferencing from home would be very beneficial to students who are born into households were they have no choice but to busy themselves and to be an independent because they can't be dependent on their parent guardian. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+b3869e6e97aa,E39559BF14F2,"
+Although, others believe that distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by online or video conferencing is not beneficial. Others believe that distance learning wouldn't be beneficial for students because the youth is too irresponsible of holding themselves accountable for having such a tremendous responsibility. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+920b1735eef8,E39559BF14F2,"My freshmen year, I had a very close friend, Generic_Name, Generic_Name was a trouble maker at school. Because Generic_Name was a trouble maker at school, her parents thought that public school was not the best place for her to receive an education. Therefore, Generic_Name took online classes at home. Online classes tend to be a very tedious and a independent responsibility that requires a ton of focus and self-control. Generic_Name did not have these qualities. Because Generic_Name took online classes from home and obtained the qualities of having no focus and no self control, she did not take her online classes as seriously as she needed to. During the times that Generic_Name was supposed to be focused with her online circular, she was more focused on boys and going out to parties. Distance learning was not beneficial to Generic_Name because she was too irresponsible to have such a tremendous responsibility that she was supposed to hold her accountable for. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0ece43874abf,E39559BF14F2,"In conclusion, depending on who and how someones personal life is, distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conference. This can be tremendously beneficial to those who suffer from any kind of mental or physical illness and those who have a busy schedule. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+0664bdab51b9,E397850CD3D2,Electoral college is a process of electors and a poupular vote is by the people ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d94989f50101,E397850CD3D2,"In this argue it ask which one would i favor, i have read the artical and as i was reading i have seen that i would keep Electoral college. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+cb6f28bd7ff4,E397850CD3D2,I have three reason. one of them it's easier for us understand how the prosses works. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5ee16230d88d,E397850CD3D2,"my second reason is some people dont care about who they vote for, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff297731d6f5,E397850CD3D2,and my third reason is the history of Electoral college. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35db7eb2d41d,E397850CD3D2,My fist reason is the the way the process work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b80cfa75d842,E397850CD3D2,The process works as a number of electors. The electors are what count more thoes are what count to see who are next president is going to be they are the final vote. The electors get together and talk it out so see who wins the most votes. The number of electors are 538. About 270 electors are for the president. The election for the president is held every four years after the first Monday in november. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b66e538e1203,E3A519D05CE5,"Although I understand why you would reconsider the policy I believe it could go either way.
+
+Some students may take advantage of the policy and secretly use it in class.
+
+Others might take embarrassing photos of somebody else and ruin their life.
+
+The only way to stop this from happening is to ban cell phones for good, however that can also take away the privileges that some students deserve, so what should happen to the policy?
+
+Here is my answer. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+ee6be51a0a84,E3A519D05CE5,I think cell phones should be allowed in school. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8e3f4fd64b83,E3A519D05CE5,"Many students use their cell phones for entertainment. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+462c20a56471,E3A519D05CE5,"Homework, schoolwork and other things take up a lot of the time in our lives and cell phones help give some people a break ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+688b99d9ebd4,E3A519D05CE5,but at the same time it could distract them from their work. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+1498ece94032,E3A519D05CE5,"However I think that is a price to pay sometimes. 
+",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e1e242f65c3f,E3A519D05CE5,"If cell phones help us in our social ways and happiness we shouldn't take it away.
+
+Yes, it does take us off task or can even disrupt our education but it's up to us individually when we think its enough. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df997059c5f2,E3A519D05CE5,"We take education to help us have a brighter future and cell phones may get in the way but if we all come together, our community or even the whole world and help each other out then we can still have a bright future. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+57865a60bbbc,E3A519D05CE5,"However, what good would it be if we're not having fun along the way? 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a48f80c08138,E3A519D05CE5,"In conclusion, I think cell phones should be allowed in school during free times.
+
+If someone is using it when they shouldn't then they can be punished but let's not leave anyone in the dark if they are having a problem.
+
+If we help each other out then the world will definitely be a better place. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+914894cfe976,E3A689BDA786,"being apart of the voting process is extremely important.It's important,because you are helping by popular vote for the president of the United States.Electoral College helps you get a better understanding of the voting process and the effect that everyone's vote has ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+083904ecad9d,E3A689BDA786,"However,the Electoral colleges are not a really big help when it comes down to the country.Here is provided information about why they should change election by popular vote. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+9e8c474a3529,E3A689BDA786,"First to start the discussion,Electoral Colleges were estblished by the founding fathers in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president by popular vote.The Electoral College is not just a place it's an important process.This college is made of electors.They have meetings where they vote for the president and vice president.The college is consisted of 538 electors.At least 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president.Each candidate that is interested in becoming president in your state has to have his or her own flock of electores.The electors are chosen by the political party ran by the candidate ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68234383143c,E3A689BDA786,This college basically provides you with a idea of why it is important to vote. The country's fate rests in the hands of many. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+10fe82d03fb9,E3A689BDA786,"Next,The Electoral college system only allows voters to vote for the slate electors. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+7fbf1350e61a,E3A689BDA786,"president of the United States votes is more important then the slate electors.The president of the United States is the one responsible for the Country.Most people refer to the most common argument between the electoral college as the disater factor.Like for instance if someone wanted to vote for a specific person you would have to vote for a different amount of slate electors also depending where you lived as well. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d18a97b54587,E3A689BDA786,"Continuing,the Electoral college is really regarded as an anachronism aslo known as a non-democratic method of selecting a president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+defd4b621326,E3A689BDA786,"Many people believe that,that should be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves more popular votes is the winner.Each party selects a slates of electors that is trusted to vote for the nominee that was picked slate electors.Even though the Electoral has a lack of conservative reasons, there are five reasons that people think that should be retained. The first reason is the certainy of outcome,second Everyone's President,third Swing states,fourth Big States,and lastly Avoiding run-off Elections.These 5 things are reasons why people feel that these colleges should stay. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1544397094ad,E3A689BDA786,"The conclusion, the president of the United states is chosen by our votes.We have the power to make this country strong,but we also have the power to make this country a train wreck.Voting is really important this can determine the fate of the country. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+2b17aa493442,E3E96A297604,",I think you should change the system up ",Position,Adequate,,,
+1e3529d6dfb4,E3E96A297604,I think the electoral college is a bad idea because it is not good at determining the winner ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+31982ac867f8,E3E96A297604,The electoral college is good but its alot of work to find out who wins the President and Vice President seat. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d575b6ddaaae,E3E96A297604,The electoral college is also a big complicated system that can techanical mess up someones chances of winning ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4a2491923526,E3E96A297604,"The electoral college is basically us voting for electors,not the president. The electoral college is not a good system to use beccause just like the article ""The Indefensible Electoral College"" says ""Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate?"". What do we do then, we can't take back our vote. This is how some presidents win without even knowing we messed up on voting. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+84b6ad932d73,E3E96A297604,"In Addition to my idea about removing the Electoral College, I think its a bad idea because the electoral college is not a good determing the winner. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+77ebb31ac65d,E3E96A297604,A prime example of why the electoral college is a bad idea is when Al Gore lost the election in 2000 against Bush. It is stated that Al Gore had won the popular vote but lost when it came to electoral college he lost. It is said that over 60 of thoses voters wanted or prefered a direct election instead of the electoral college system. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+de27172eff1f,E3E96A297604,"The Article""In Defense of the electoral college"" states things that good about the Electoral College like ""The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candiate receives a majority of the votes cast.""This is a example of that statement is Nixion in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 plurality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in Electoral College. The Electoral College is still a democratic in many peoples eyes and mines.
+
+The Electoral College will always give a advantage on the outcome of the winner. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cdec6d22d2ac,E3E96A297604,The state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors and thaat those electors could always the will of the people ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+207a27cb5964,E3E96A297604,"The electoral college is is unfair,outdated, and irrational in the united states. Most say the electoral college is good because its keeps favortizm away but it really just adds it to the election. The direct election is way more simple and easy to find out who wins. I send you this letter to see if you would think about taking it out, but i know you probably won't see this. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+067290e75a51,E3EC600A1754,I strongly agree of keeping the Electoral College for the use of the congress' approval for the newly President of 2016 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5ef3b8af6bd5,E3EC600A1754,"The Electoral College has a lengthy process, but can come in good use of determining the new President. Citizens vote for the electors and the electors decide who's best for the country ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f0cf393ff9f,E3EC600A1754,"Even though, there are claims about the Electoral College not being fair for the people, I still defend it because it has it's good factors, like Run-off Elections ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+459eea2cb2ec,E3EC600A1754,"the requirement that a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal for the people, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c41245318517,E3EC600A1754,and the resoring weight of the eletoral number by population. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+577c1c2a875d,E3EC600A1754,"As so you know, the Electoral College is a process of the selction of the electors, then the gathering of electors to vote for the president and vice president. Finally, the electoral votes by the Congress. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+55dac061b0ea,E3EC600A1754,"When the electors pick the president, they look at their background, such as, what school they attend, what they studied, where they were born, etc. They pick someone they trust to do the job. When there is a Run-off Election, the House Of Representatives picks the president. I personally think this is a good thing because they picked the person who would do best in the job by gathering everyone's vote to decide it. Because no country could have two presidents with two vice presidents. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+35d069eb6bcf,E3EC600A1754,"Some may say it's unjustice or not fair because the House Of Representatives decides the whole election. There is also the fact that when determining the winner, they both look at the popular votes and the electoral votes, and they see who got the most electoral votes and they win the election. 
+",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3cd730c157ba,E3EC600A1754,"The Electoral College  puts it simple, because they choose someone with a region where they most likely get the most electoral votes. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1bfbf17f38af,E3EC600A1754,"For example, Romney was in the South region, and he knows he wouldn't have to do much there because of that was where he was currently from. Now lets compare that to someone that was in the area around North Dakota. He would most likely not win that many votes since it's only three electoral numbers. So the Electoral College gives a chance for the president they chose to win because of where they used to be located in order to get the most popular and electoral votes. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a10d65f727a3,E3EC600A1754,The Electoral College restores and reduces some of the weight of the electoral by its population. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+35ea0fe2f5a4,E3EC600A1754,"Smalls states aren't widely noticed by the president because they feel like they should concentrated in the big states because of there electoral votes. Still, small states tend to make it easier for them because they look at if the state was either Republican or Democrac during the past years and they take note of that. They know they'll win in those states, even though they are small numbers, every inch of it counts to help them win the title of President. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+aa5a333be033,E3EC600A1754,"Therefore, Mister Sentor, I agree in keeping the Electoral Vote because of it's reasonable factors that can help the president win. Popular vote doesn't tell anything because the people would know nothing about the president or what he accomplished. It should be kept because it has been used for many years now and has been useful for every president to win ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+93e1cefba807,E450F87DBD79,NASA thinks that it was made by the planet being made because aliens do not exist. You can not just guess at how it was made. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+458a921fff21,E450F87DBD79,This is why NASA thinks you are wrong. Aliens could not have made this ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9378a53a1f3d,E450F87DBD79,because they do not exist ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+73fba61b3078,E450F87DBD79,"it would take a long time to make anything that scale, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0a9a173767bd,E450F87DBD79,and it would take them years to make. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9b932480060e,E450F87DBD79,Aliens could not have made the face becasue they do not exist. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+db2c994a1dd2,E450F87DBD79,"This is why NASA thinks this. Aliens would have to have good construction and excavtion equipment. As you would say, they don't need that stuff they just built it. However, there is no physicaly possible way that they could have made it without the equipment. In order to build they would need this equipment. All together aliens could not have made this because they are not capable and do not exist. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+16dda2daae16,E450F87DBD79,Aliens could not have made the face because it would take a long time to make anything that scale ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8a97275cbb3a,E450F87DBD79,"Here is why they could not have done it. They don't have the capablities to make anything like the face on Mars. The people that think otherwise would say that it isn't a natural land form. However, NASA scientist where comparing it to other natural landforms. That is why NASA thinks that it is impossible for the aliens to make anything to that scale. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d557aed2140d,E450F87DBD79,Aliens could not have made the face becasue it would take to long. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4965a03ddb15,E450F87DBD79,"Here is why NASA is proving facts. This is not possible in any shape, way, or form because it would take over 300 years to do so. You would say that the aliens just bulit it as we bulid buliding today. But, they would have to have constrcution workers working every single day for this to happen and that is why NASA says it is impossible. Together that is why I do not think is is possible. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c8b48e8dc4cd,E450F87DBD79,"In conclusion, aliens do not exist, do not have cababilatlies to make anything to that scale, and it would take to long that is why aliens could not have made this face. People get their hopes up about things to easily that is why NASA does not think any of this is even near possible. It would be better if NASA told evryone the full truth. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+98650cc0ca2b,E481765F7DDF,"
+Good day, I am writing this letter to let you know it's time for things to change. I have been reading and researching the Electoral College and i have a strong opinion on it. As you know, the Electoral College is a process when all five hundred and thirty eight electors vote on electors and defenders. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+cd6c807258cc,E481765F7DDF,"This way of voting for electors lets the people have no say in whose running our goverment! Our goverment should not allow or be based on ""the winner takes all"" method. When we choose for OUR president we should be able to choose OUR electors too! ",Position,Effective,,,
+06d976267105,E481765F7DDF,"Under the 23rd amendment of the constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. The electors shouldnt be chosen by the canidate's political party, we should choose. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+32a538fb1b17,E481765F7DDF,By voting for a president every four years a new party of electors have already been selected to run with him and we dont get any say. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+35c638815329,E481765F7DDF,"After the presidential election, your governer creates a list of all the canidates that ran for president in your state with a list of their representative electors. This is later sent to Congress and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f2735f7a08e3,E481765F7DDF,"
+Richard Nixon, Bob Dole, Jimmy Carter, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agree that we need to remove and forget about the electoral college. This year our voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could lose the presidency. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+61678e78133b,E481765F7DDF,Still the electoral college still has defenders fror themselves ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+f76c6cdd2c14,E481765F7DDF,"voters arent actually voting for the president, but for a group of electors who in turn elect the president, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5b6b2cd829af,E481765F7DDF,"How are we supposed to trust these electors if we dont even know who they are and their background until after the election? Who even are these electors i wondered. I figured out that all the electors are actually anyone with a brain and not holding a public office, fantastic. So how do i know they are reliable and going to do whats best for my state and our country? Voters dont even control whom their electors vote for most of the time which is kind of scary. Some electors are even faithless in their party's canidate so they dont even vote for them at all! How can we rely on a group of people who dont rely on their party? ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1978838407c,E481765F7DDF,"As much as I hate to say it, there most definitley is an upside to the Electoral College. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e48233ff8299,E481765F7DDF,"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that needs to be overruled by declaring the canidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. I personally think that is the best way to decide who gets in. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+b1b9791d37db,E481765F7DDF,"Each party selects a slate of electors that are trusted to vote for the party's nominee. Sometimes the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. Another reason The Electoral College is a positive way of voting is how certain the outcome is. There is never failure in the counting of the votes and there us rarely a tie between two people. My favorite reason is because ""everybody is president"". This means everybody can make their own decisions and have a great amount of freedom. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+761dd1663def,E481765F7DDF,Even though im all for removing the Electoral College there is positives too ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+21cb93fac9fe,E48B9182B257,"
+The robust political system of the American government is greatly hindered by the Electoral College. The Electoral College isn't completely representative of what citizens really want. History will prove such logic with just a simple recollection of past events. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+e1e24f41c264,E48B9182B257,"""Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new elector who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.) In the same vein, ""faithless"" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and case a deciding vote for whomever they please.""
+
+(Paragraph 11) ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+500465303401,E48B9182B257,"Americans are not getting the representation we deserve. In fact, in a democracy, we should be representing our own beliefs, ourselves. The Electoral College must be totally abolished and the popular vote should become the new standard for political voting. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+64d694b64f16,E48B9182B257,"Time and time again, we have been shown that the Electoral College is nothing but a gimmick and ""a compromise between election of President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.""
+
+(Paragraph 1)
+
+by the founding fathers. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f9ae9cfd6909,E48B9182B257,"Maybe that had worked in the past, when the population was statistically low compared to today, and citizens were less informed because of the lack of media avaliable, like the internet and television. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+2e2a408f2f66,E48B9182B257,"But, it is not working today. The 2000 election serves as an example of a faulty system. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b640d3dacc08,E48B9182B257,"""According to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral college--won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.""
+
+(Paragraph 9)
+
+Therefore, this is an obvious majority of citizens who agree with me. The Electoral College is almost universally despised, and not considered the most effective way to elect a President. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c8deeb863774,E48B9182B257,"""At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the swing states. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+beceddfa63e7,E48B9182B257,"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.""
+
+(Paragraph 13)
+
+This is ridiculous and not at all fair to voters. In this sense, it is absolutely true that every vote doesn't count. Unless you're in a swing state, your vote may mean very little in the grand scheme of things. Every legal American deserves the right to a balanced and fair election with a true, meaningful vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+0432acb803d7,E48B9182B257,"Claims by supporters of the Electoral College are not effective. In fact, one writer finds Swing States to be a good thing! ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+105d4a480604,E48B9182B257,"Yes, ""Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign--to really listen to the competing candidates--knowing they are going to decide the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average...and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election."" 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+cefad356100a,E48B9182B257,"Seriously, that is absurd. Every voter should have the right to know they are going to decide the election ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fee94770bbee,E48B9182B257,"This writer is implying that the small state votes are useless, and that the voters in them don't even pay attention to campaigns or research before they vote! As a former resident of a politically smaller-impact state, I know very well that citizens there research thoroughly before they do any voting. Putting thought into a vote isn't just a thing people do in large states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8b361192f4c8,E48B9182B257,"Maybe it will be that way in the future, because due to the Electoral College, votes there don't even matter anymore. Citizens are losing faith in their expressions of freedom and ability to vote and uphold justice. The Electoral College needs to go, because it makes for an unfair political system that only benefits politicians running, not the average joe.""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality."" 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d2dfd3ffca78,E4DA68D2918E,I think that policy one is a better policy ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f0afe9fba99,E4DA68D2918E,if as long as we don't have our cell phones out in class then we should be able to have them out during free time and lunch time ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebeaa2c221ee,E4DA68D2918E,But with cell phones not being aloud to be on in school or used makes the students want to have them out in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+de0187787189,E4DA68D2918E,"So if you were to allow them only in free time or lunch, then i think that students wouldn't have to bring them out in class. They could just have them in free time. But the more the students cant have them out at all then the more there just going to use them in class, when they are supposed to be learning they will be texting on their phones or on the internet instead. That could make them fail whatever grade their in and have to retake it the next year. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+db3246588c9a,E4DA68D2918E,"If you would allow cell phones, maybe the students will appreciate their learning more and actually want to do assignments and tests instead of having their cell phones out. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+fd023e5315ee,E4DA68D2918E,"So if you think about it, it might just be better to allow them then to obey them. I sure would hope that you will rethink this over because i am pretty sure you don't want to have to deal with these students again next year. But its all up to you. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f3e1fdbc89b7,E4DA68D2918E,"I do really think that it would be way better to allow them because sometimes in class , my friends and i have our cell phones out i mean what student wouldn't? ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+cc112c699cfc,E4DA68D2918E,But some students only do it like once or twice like me but other they will just have it out all the time in every class and not pay attention. So that just makes them fail and have to redo everything all over. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a837cef6f5f4,E4DA68D2918E,Allowing cell phones only in free time and lunch's would possibly change some of the students grades and attitudes. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c44db159c0f0,E4DA68D2918E,"They could use them when their not in class and at lunch. Instead of in class and everywhere else. I am pretty sure that most of the teachers have their phones out so that just gives the ok to students to take out their's. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9a2752cf9349,E4DA68D2918E,What i am really trying to say is that you should allow them not obey them. So if you would take a second and reconsider this then it would make all the students plus me HAPPY ! ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+37dea6b879d1,E4DC7BF5147E,Students should be required to clean the community ,Position,Effective,,,
+feb0c1e0718d,E4DC7BF5147E,that reason is because half of the garbage is there's they need to be helping and cleaning up there mess not so others can do it for them ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e636e64f6323,E4DC7BF5147E,plus it is good exercise ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+20258befa03e,E4DC7BF5147E,So yes i do think that students should be helping out by picking u garbage so ti can help the community and help the planet and make are school a little more better than what it is. By helping the community i think that we can make the environment around the school better such as other places at home. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7eb90c55e906,E4DC7BF5147E,"Cleaning up are litter will help with the problems at home u get to hang with your friends and you get to help the environment, it doesn't take time from anything cause you still get to hang with your friends play games and still have fun with the whole school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f17ab3fdf05b,E4DC7BF5147E,The tools we have today will make it better especial now that we have tons of students here and maybe those who help can have extra credit or meet new friends or maybe have new friends that we didn't even know we had in the school that existed because we hang out with the same people we made friends with. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e7f283abc72a,E4DC7BF5147E,"So cleaning up the school will not only help the school , but the wildlife, kids who are over weight and do not get out as much as your suppose to , help kids get along and share what they have in common ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fed10d2972db,E4DC7BF5147E,It will also give are school a better name than what it is and raise more money for schools equipment and uniforms. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0f799ed6cb0a,E4DC7BF5147E,"You might even have you parents come out and watch, just be helping out a little can make a big difference. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6dfbc45d25fb,E4DC7BF5147E,"The school needs to be cleaned and it needs to be done , You have free time so why don't we just help out a little and make a change in the community just a little will help everyone in need. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a4869bfe72fe,E4DEDB16A59E,Dear senator I have a problem with the current voteing procesess. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+bf76ead4c586,E4DEDB16A59E,You see senator with Electoral Collage the votes can be swayed very easily ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5c61d04dad82,E4DEDB16A59E,all one would have to do is threaten or bribe the voter into voteing for that particular person. This in-turn could effect the outcome of the voteing procesess greatly be it by leagal or ileagal means ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7de695ed2e58,E4DEDB16A59E,i think the voteing procesess should be based off of the popular vote so that it would be difficult for one to do what was stated above ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b77e8dd40b7c,E4DEDB16A59E,There is another group that thinks that the voteing procesess should stay the same ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+57d858e7735f,E4DEDB16A59E,i think that this group thinks this because they know how to get around the system or play it. Doing so makes it easy'er for them to have someone that they trust or control on the top of the game ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ac6e82d4b353,E4DEDB16A59E,"But then if this ocuurs are we really choseing our president, i dont think so. Even still that is only my opinion. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+f46da1263fe0,E4DEDB16A59E,"This is what I think the outher group wants to achive. You have read what i thought on this subject and i hope to bring you over to my side on this argument. There is curuption every were and we need to stick together, if we dont then who can we trust ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d8f13a21e1f1,E4FC29A88EDD,"The idea of a driverless car has always been the goal set for future technology. This is seen in the constant stream of futuristic movies or shows. However, those only convey the positive and idealistic aspects of such vehicles. The ignorance of the negative information associated with them causes a personal disbelief in the cars. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+dda0a43bed27,E4FC29A88EDD,Driverless cars should not be developed due to the overwhelming evidence including that development/testing is against the law in the majority of the world due to the idea of possible malfunctions or irresponsible road behavior from the passengers. ,Position,Effective,,,
+aeba1316c9b4,E4FC29A88EDD,A vast majority of people agree that testing should not occur due to possible danger. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d409e8d424e,E4FC29A88EDD,"The article ""Driverless Cars Are Coming"" speaks about how traffic laws are currently written to include human control of the vehicle in Paragraph 9. Furthermore, it talks about how limited the allowance of testing is. With a large scale rejection of such ideas it is wise to consider the fact that there is not just assumptions made by everyone. The article blatantly puts down the states who did not follow suit in allowing the tests. There was not any consideration of the majority possibly deciding this based on solid fact and the issues not yet addressed by the companies manufacturing the vehicles. So, the legality of the driverless cars is merely one point amongst a plethora of other issues. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+133a28849af3,E4FC29A88EDD,One contribution to the rejection of testing is the possible malfunctions that could happen. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1d773d9d8b86,E4FC29A88EDD,"All throughout the article the accidents in the future were expected. which is why the companies wish for the human assistance to be alert to ""take over"". However, when observing that statement closely the accident would be caused by the car itself due to the fact that it drove in such way. The weather could be an out of control factor involved and if the car does not drive in a way that considers that, then the fault is on the car. The same can be said for a car collision. If all of the vehicles in the world are driven by themselves, then it would be the cars that caused the collision. Paragraph 7 touches on the liability issues of situations similar to those mentioned. The issues surrounding the driverless cars are preventable by not producing them at all. That way there is no room for error when it comes to the safety of those on the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ca1f63ab391e,E4FC29A88EDD,The manufacturers of the vehicle contradict themselves when it comes to the passengers involved. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+63472e8a53fc,E4FC29A88EDD,Paragraph 8 discusses making the driving fun by entertaining them. Whereas Paragraph 7 is about the driver taking over and the different functions to make them aware. The key to having the person aware of the dangerous situation is to not have them distracted in the first place. Plus that prevents any accidents if flaws in the warning system should occur. The reason there is a long lasting trust in human judgement on the road is that the people have a chance to take action quick enough. If they were not previously paying attention due to the driverless car then that chance is wasted by them attempting to figure out what the situation is in the first place. Eliminate the possibilty of that irresponsible lack of attention by having the person drive to begin with. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+7bee454dac4b,E4FC29A88EDD,"Driverless cars would allow too many flaws in the system and legality issues that prevent them for obtaining the title of a safter option. The manufacturers are attempting to make a car that is easier and requires less effort, but in doing so there is a plethora of issues that accompany it. The question of who is legally to blame for issues would waste time and money. During the process of development, the producers are accepting accidents as a given fact instead of trying to produce a flawless car. They are also focusing on the idea of a ""entertaining car"" instead of one that keeps the passengers alert for possible accidents. Therefore, there are too many arguments for safety against the vehicles to even consider mass producing them. The driverless cars are much safer on the big screen than in reality. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+c82aa8d47efd,E504081AA343,"In many countries most children do not have a choose of whether or they want to up out the community. But, if u look at those children from other countries they are all responsible, and know how to act in public. Not saying all Americans are bad but, that we take things for granted. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+f39e1da0a08c,E504081AA343,I believe that children should do community service ,Position,Adequate,,,
+8a46768986c9,E504081AA343,"it can help them understand that not everything is easy but, that everything it is not just handed to you. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4bf0c502ff47,E504081AA343,I go to school everyday and watch children act a fool and be disrespectful to their teachers. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+30b2af11b5ed,E504081AA343,"So i think that it's because at home these children do not have anyone telling right from wrong but, not only that they have no responsibly at home. They all get away with to much and mostly come home play video games, get on Facebook, and thing like that. So maybe if the school help them understand that life isn't easy just maybe these children will be a bit better. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f6d92da81294,E504081AA343,With that said you can probably see how trilled I am to see schools try and make a difference in these kids life show them that the bad habits you have now you will mostly have later in life and not everyone going to put up with it. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+6ef77d83dfb9,E504081AA343,"Even thought I am with the idea i still have to put myself in their shoes because, some of these kids have seen stuff that I never plan on seeing. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+68ed165977ae,E504081AA343,Also is this community service during school hours and if so don't you think it would be taking away from our learning time I mean responsible is great to have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3de4471c03e7,E504081AA343,"It might not such a great thing if u do not know how to read, write or do simple math. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+41d76e05052a,E504081AA343,So I believe that children just need a little bit more responsible in their life to learn to make better choices. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a2d61316bae3,E51103E36330,"Driverless cars are new, advanced forms of technology. Manufacturers seem to be getting closer and closer to an improved and completely driverless car. They have different advantages and are very convenient. This may be the new innovation that everyone raves about. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+8200b12f26b3,E51103E36330,"I think having driverless cars is a great idea and a huge milestone. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+b05823af092c,E51103E36330,"Driverless cars have come a long way, and sensors have become more advanced with time. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fa01c9c53a79,E51103E36330,"The sensors can now detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. This is very beneficial to the driver because he or she may not know how to respond or react to these kinds of dangerous situations. The sensors enable the car to apply brakes on the seperate wheels and decrease the power from the engine, which allows a better responce and more control than the human driver could manage. More improvements on this technology will bring safer and more durable cars, which will increase the number of driving taskes on their own. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+627ac6c96e7d,E51103E36330,"Even though most cars aren't completely driverless, many improvements and innovations allow the driverless cars to evolve and become more intriguing. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+538f623990b7,E51103E36330,"For example, BMW developed the ""Traffic Jam Assistant."" This car could handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph. This car also had special touch sensors to ensure the driver holds onto the wheel. Having cars that aren't fully driverless allows the driver to remain alert, so they can take over when there is a situation. This is a great thing about these cars. There are driver seats that vibrate when the car is in danger of backing into something. The Google car announces when the driver should take over. Other cars might have flashing lights or other signals that warn the driver to take control of the vehicle. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f93591904f5a,E51103E36330,"Driverless cars have come a long way and are still in the process of being perfected. New, developed features have different advantages such as the advanced sensors that repsond to dangerous situations and the signals that allow the reader to remain alert. Overall, I think that driverless cars are a major innovation and can be very effectful and beneficial for drivers. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+424fea75f9fb,E51722919697,"I was informed of your latest decision on a new school policy, being a student at the school that it would effect, I believe it is my duty and right to pose my opinion. You suggested that all students that wish to participate in sports or other school related activities must obtain at least a B average. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+3cb9fc0804db,E51722919697,"Well i believe this would be a great policy, if we, the students, didn't have to partake in all the practices or meetings. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+d3e6f31c37d3,E51722919697,"Going to the practices and attending all the meetings is a requirement to obtain your membership to the group or team in most cases. Being obligated to be present at these events ruptures the time we have to study. In order to hold good grades, you have to be able to prepare for the assessments that will be given to us, which counts a lot towards our final average. If you strongly believe this is a good policy to enforce, you must allow a bend in the academics then.
+
+When you give more students the chance to be a part of something, you gain a better ratio of the school succeeding. When the School succeeds in certain sports and clubs the school will gain recognition, good recognition. Along with the recognition, we could win money, money is always good for schools because there is always something that can be bettered with the appropriate amount of funding.
+
+Also, giving students that may be struggling the chance to be a part of a sport or club could spark a greater interest in them. It could inspire them to set higher goals for themselves and to encourage them to do better. Joining a school sport or other activity may give them a desire to pursue what they are doing in that sport or club. Say someone becomes a part of the robotics club, they grow to love what they are getting the chance to do. because they love it they may grow up to me an engineer. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+641684b4363d,E51722919697,"If we are not given the opportunities, we may never know. Not knowing what we can excel at may cause a life of insecurities. Do want to be the one held responsible for something like that? ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+7454a7653a96,E56E7793EBF4,I highly recomind keping the Electoral college. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+75a9c8f26581,E56E7793EBF4,"in sourse one it states that the ""Electoral college was established in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and  election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens ",Claim,Effective,,,
+32efcefcbf93,E56E7793EBF4,"The Electoral College is ""widely regarded as an anachronism"" a non-democratic  method of selecting a president that ought to be over ruled by declaring the canidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. This way it is fair. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+538666b187fd,E56E7793EBF4,Did you know that when you vote for a presidential canidate you are really voting for a slate of electors? ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97f1eb107d2b,E56E7793EBF4,In the Electoral College they avoid the problems of the elections which no canidate recevies a majority of the votes cast ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1e4bd343ed16,E56E7793EBF4,Also the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states by the population lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitition ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5e5a6fbca73f,E56E7793EBF4,"As a citizen of the the United States of America i feel that if we use the Electoral College, it would make things so much easier on us. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+506c70349423,E57528C2CF2E,"I personally believe that, the landform in the moon is actually a landform not a ""face"". I say that because due to some of the information from the argument in this passage ",Position,Adequate,,,
+083eb2c8e49e,E57528C2CF2E,"The landform in the moon is not a face because, scientist have proven actual facts on this topic. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d14f9f0d673,E57528C2CF2E,"""Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the first image appeared on a JPL website, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9e2975dc1b9e,E57528C2CF2E,"In addition, i also believe that there is no way face could just randomly appear inside of the moon monument because, I think there are no sure thing as aliens. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+5d6f338b42c3,E57528C2CF2E,And i think that no humans were even exsistent by the time that monument happened. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b1b9df75dafe,E57528C2CF2E,"""And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a puicture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c87bbb5092a,E57528C2CF2E,"Also, scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ce90f40bfb50,E57528C2CF2E,"In conclusion, i still strongley feel as if the moon dosent have a face i just feel like it was all a mistake or an imagination ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+87a6a6f7ece6,E589B660EDA4,"I think you should require all students to perform community service because many students laze around with nothing to do, when they could be helping the community. ",Position,Effective,,,
+b74c576ec5f9,E589B660EDA4,"Many kids who are bored tend to get caught up in bad things , such as gangs, drugs, and violence. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+666f132508ec,E589B660EDA4,"In requiring kids to perform community service, you are preventing them from doing bad things, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7fd7e5b98a19,E589B660EDA4,you are giving them something to do after school ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f61bd260bbd7,E589B660EDA4,and you are helping them help the community. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+08b7a3673f47,E589B660EDA4,"I walk around my community to see kids fighting, doing drugs, stealing, and other bad things ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c267ddee0dc4,E589B660EDA4,"Many kids are bored after school , with nothing to do , no friends to play with, so they sit around and get fat and lazy. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a6cc579f6f23,E589B660EDA4,"They could make the community a better place, by cleaning up trash , and helping the community stay a nice, safe, and clean place. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b3cf61b866d1,E589B660EDA4,"So , I think you should require kids to perform community service, because it would be good for them AND the community. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+edc116ba41c6,E5B1751B2798,"I think that we should keep the
+
+Electoral College because changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States can be bad. It can be bad because if majority of the people pick a president and he's not a good president and they are just picking him to pick him then he might not be a good president , he might just be popular aka well known. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+442a32ab6a28,E5B1751B2798,"We should keep the Electoral College because it is fair and it is going by all of the votes , not just the popular votes. ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+e7e20f43fa53,E5B1751B2798,"""The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes, is required to elect the President."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7baf53cfb02d,E5B1751B2798,it is a non-democratic method ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e93f863d2007,E5B1751B2798,"When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. The Electoral College has a better chance of having an outcome than the popular votes. "" 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c097bb4530c0,E5B1751B2798,"In 2012's election, for example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5e6ad30c1ac7,E5B1751B2798,the Electoral College is a much more trustworthy system than the popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f21710d78a68,E5B1751B2798,"Electoral College has something called
+
+""Swing States''
+
+Swing states are states that often pay close attention to the campaign and they really listen to the competing campaign. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a84f24f3965c,E5B1751B2798,They are the most thoughtful voters and the most thoughtful ones should be the ones to decide on everything. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+65f51989d8ec,E5B1751B2798,"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states"" ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e9d4b6c04230,E5B1751B2798,That is incorrect because the electoral college pays close attention to every state to see which ones would be good to pick ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+cc307f170906,E5B1751B2798,"The Popular States says that the electoral College system is out of date and lame , ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+c4f4c48a1a66,E5B1751B2798,The Electoral College avoids run off elections unlike the popular vote system. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+f2e253a05f8f,E5B1751B2798,I am ending my claim by saying we should keep the electoral college because it is a more organized system. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f1d56710e881,E5C0A11D06E2,"The citizens of your state are crying injustice, but nothing is being done to serve them. The Electoral College goes against the Bill of Rights opening words of ""We the People"". The current system of electing the President is more complex and less beneficial than choosing our leader through popular vote. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a32b5648126f,E5C0A11D06E2,The popular vote actually listens to the people of the United States' opinion and how they want this country run. The Electoral College has many faults ,Position,Effective,,,
+66e5d5ce178a,E5C0A11D06E2,such as in the case of electoral overuling popular vote ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+19a1c68d39df,E5C0A11D06E2,"possible corruption of state senators (no accusation presented), and could lead to the rare event of a tie ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+065bb7b97494,E5C0A11D06E2,"Such as in the election of 2000, Al Gore should have won the race. The people poke through the popular vote to choose him, but the Electoral College thought otherwise. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a78fd8883ba5,E5C0A11D06E2,"As stated in the article, that usually state senators choose the representatives of the state in the Electoral College, if bribery and corruption affect our nations such as those in the Miuddle East, the presidential race can and will be rigged in one party's favor. Due to Mane and Nebraska policy of ""proportional representation"" could lead to a tie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+979e9aedd257,E5C0A11D06E2,"As you can see, the Electoral College has many faults and is outdated due to the rapid population increase of our nation and reasons stated above. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+558b2f2c74ae,E5C0A11D06E2,Some may argue there will be inaccuracies with popular vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+104dd409179e,E5C0A11D06E2,whereas we already use the popular vote today as a way of forecasting the oucome and seeing the people's real choice. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+1182bc790e18,E5EA551C69CF,If it is not broken why should we fix it? The electoral college system has been with us for as long as we have had presidents and one flaw if going to make us scrap eveything? There are many ways to fix the electoral college and throwing the system in the trash should be the last resort. ,Lead,Effective,,,
+407f7acd939e,E5EA551C69CF,"Although the election of 2000 is an example of a problem that shoud be fixed it is not a reason to do away with the system. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+d43ca6af826f,E5EA551C69CF,"To commence with, the electoral college is a fine system that has easily fixed flaws such as the election of George W. Bush versus Al Gore in which Gore won the popular vote while still losing the whole election. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+3c8972c195be,E5EA551C69CF,"An obvious solution to this problem could be what Nebraska and Maine are doing and introducing proportional representation as opposed to the ""winner-take-all"" system. Also if we were to switch from the electoral college it would take citizens time to get used to the new stystem. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5081c5dc35a2,E5EA551C69CF,Although the electoral college seems unreliable ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c7e310c01191,E5EA551C69CF,there is a certainty of outcome to it ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c54633579691,E5EA551C69CF,while some people dispute over the outcome of the vote ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8c0041b4a37a,E5EA551C69CF,it is likely an arguement about the popular vote. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+e388d7588f67,E5EA551C69CF,Although we have had the system for so long and it has been reliable and there are ways to fix it some people would still like to move away from it and create a new system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0035468f1d4c,E5EA551C69CF,"If we were to shift from the electoral college to another way to vote what would we have, a voting system fully based on popular votes? no, because a popular vote system would rely too much on citizens being able to make informed decisions which would result in unreliable outcomes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+286abe9f3168,E5EA551C69CF,"Henceforth, the electoral college is a reliable system with easily fixed flaws, therefore we should not fix or replace the system. If the electoral college was to be replaced there would be pandemonium as to what system shall replace it, how we will adapt to the new system, and if the system is an improvement or a step back in innovation and our future leaders. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+be9e3ce79cae,E5F47974A6EF,"NASA received a photo from Viking 1, in 1976, and it appeared to be a face. In 1998, a higher resolution picture came in and in 2001 an even higher resolution picture came in. NASA scientist thought aliens created this. But they didn't it was just a Martian mesa. A few days after they figured out it was a Martian mesa, NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption on it noted a ""huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth."" Authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. And it certainly did! The
+
+""Face on Mars"" has since become a pop icon. It starred in a Hollywood film, appears in books, magazines, radio talkshows- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! The picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+3a60f5ac590d,E5F47974A6EF,"The ""Face on Mars"" wasn't an actually face. It was only a Martian mesa ",Position,Adequate,,,
+a14e6045c042,E5F47974A6EF,If scientist actually proved aliens are real I'm sure they won't tell the public. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+334da197ed8c,E60257F8B334,Is something wrong with cell phones being allowed in school? There is no such accunization. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+bdf6ec8a74e4,E60257F8B334,Cell phones are used for important purposes and should be allowed in school and usable except in class. That's why i chose to go along with policy one. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+af6e3ca0fa5a,E60257F8B334,Policy one states that cell phones will be allowed in school and that students could use them during lunch and other free periods ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62052f12b15a,E60257F8B334,"However in class, they are to be silenced and put away! There are many reasons for this policy. It also helps the kids not get in trouble as much. Students mostly get in trouble for texting in class. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+97bb5211de91,E60257F8B334,This policy is trying to prevent students from sharing test answers in class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bee97c67ef3d,E60257F8B334,"If they text in class they could be texting their friends telling them the answers and that is called cheating. Cheating is really a wrong thing to do, it shows what you know not your friend. Major consequences are handed out to cheaters that can cause them to fail or suffer in their career choices. Therefore cheating is prohibited. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e7e8eca05f5,E60257F8B334,Another thing that is being prevented is the lack of knowledge ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13180fb97f89,E60257F8B334,Students think they can text and listen simultaneously. But truth is all the information is going in one ear and out the other. It is important because it can help you in life. Grades reach higher levels than texting in my opinion. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0e7e6defb7a3,E60257F8B334,"The students shouldn't have a problem because, it gives them the opportunity to use it during the daytime. It's not like a prison where they have no cell phone. Students should be very grateful and lucky. They have many breaks to use them just not when it is time to be focused. Hopefully, this will help kids in the future. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+84f37c36d800,E604DD820759,"First off, I disagree with the Electoral College. I have a strong hope that we need to change to election by popular vote for president. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+eebe40aca493,E604DD820759,"The Electoral College is a process of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress (office of the federal Register 2). ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4ff51451cae3,E604DD820759,In source two it announces that the electoral college is an unfair way to votes ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dad7590d992f,E604DD820759,In my opinion I agree strongly with that statement because not everyone would get a fair oppurtunity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+81af68294409,E604DD820759,"Secondly, everyone has the right to voice their opinion on who they want to elect as president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ba82ebe05e93,E604DD820759,"With the Electoral College we wouldn't be able to voice our opinion as because as Source 2 explains that if you have Electoral College system the voters would vote for a slate of electors, but not for president. The state of electors would be the ones to elect the president. Therefore the people wouldnt get a voice to vote only the 29 people in Florida-shown on the map in source 3-not the whole state which makes it not an equal oppurtinuty to everyone who lives in that state. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51d080e2f9e6,E604DD820759,"Next, when having Electoral College instead of population vote the picked voters could pick someone wrong. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b2a688795de8,E604DD820759,"In source two it mentions that sometimes the senator could vote for the wrong person sometimes and not always can they control their vote. To add on to that the electoral college is the ""disaster factor"". The reason that it is the diaster factor is because the state legislatures are responsible for picking the electors and they could pick everyone thats agasinst a certain president and that the ""better"" president isn't picked and has a chance of our state being ruined. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1241a9a90cf8,E604DD820759,In the United States we need to have a fair way of allowing everyone to vote therefore please help me in choosing to change the electon to popular vote ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9b94a71ffe9c,E63689D747FA,Arguing about keeping the electoral college would have to be the best oppition ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+bafc3a8a1f9a,E63689D747FA,The process of the electoral college is a meeting of electors that vote forpresident and vice president. I think that the people should help out with this voting like all we do is give them advice. When this is done the people that voted are picking the right person to protect our country. And when we vote for your new president you are actually voting for the candidate's electors ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+166d774ebbbc,E63689D747FA,In maine and nebraska they are differnet form every other state they dont do the winner takes all they have a differnet system. When the president is elected he gets a certifacation of all the people he beat. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a31fcd7c1512,E63689D747FA,I think thats wrong I think that everyone that fought in this election should get a little thing. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+da2c8ec697ff,E63689D747FA,"Jimmy carter, bob dole, and others all agreed that electoral college should be abolished. In this election 60 percant of people voted not to have a electoral college. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+8d5a2ad95ca9,E63689D747FA,When voters are voting on the new president they are actally voting for the state of electors. If your voting in texas for someone that is running you wouldn't be voting for them you would be voting for the democratic electors ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f9056bed867,E63689D747FA,The best argument against the electoral college would have to be the disaster factor. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+12762b15d319,E63689D747FA,"In 2000 there was a election crisis that broke out it was the biggest one. The states leislatures are technically responsible for picking the electors and picking this people they can defy eneyone.
+
+Back in 1960 a louisiana legislature succeeded in replacing the democratic elector with a new one. Electors had refused to vote for their party's candidate and it happened in hawaii 1960. The vice president at the time had made sure that everything was back to normal ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c89562f00ead,E67A118F9AFA,"This all started 21 years ago. Here is how the face on Mars was discovered. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars, taking pictures for possible landing sites for it's sister Viking 2 and it spotted a shadown of a likely human face. It was a great big head shaped face 2 miles apart from end to end. That is how this all started. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+0d91c6ad3964,E67A118F9AFA,How could aliens make such a thing? There is no way. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6fd0ebd1d62f,E67A118F9AFA,"Some scientist believe that the face was an alien artifact, the photographing from Cydonia became a priorty for NASA when MGS showed up at the Red Planet in Sepmber. The face was not created by some things we like to call aliens that we don't even know if they exist or not, kind of like mermiads or unicorns. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0170f6a5828e,E67A118F9AFA,There is to much evidence of how this face could of formed on it's own ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2cfc9fd96dd8,E67A118F9AFA,"It was so bi it would take aliens so long to even make this thing we say that looks like a face. Some people belive that the face is ""bona fide"", which means that that face is evidence that there was life on Mars at one point. Nobody has that big of a face for it to be an actual human face. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b0966dc55b1d,E67A118F9AFA,I believe it is just a natual landform that just happened to look a lot like a human face ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b3844449f9ff,E67A118F9AFA,"The face is exactly located 41 degrees North martian latitude where it was winter in April '98, a very cloudy time on the Red Planet. This investigation the scientist haas said has been very hard work to figure out exaclty what it is. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fb48b217fdd6,E67A118F9AFA,"I still belive with all the evidence we have it has to just be God's creation and it just apeared to look like a face, no aliens or anything like that because if you want to tell me that aliens did it you better be showing me that aliens even exist first. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+391d9a0e05a0,E6FDA0489273,I believe that we should continue to use the electoral college to elect our presidents. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+263f0be3da03,E6FDA0489273,using the electoral college is better and more benificial beacauese there is a certanty of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+88cdb475f0e7,E6FDA0489273,everyones preident ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+fd7f3f2fa76e,E6FDA0489273,"swing states, ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+6a53b002c7ae,E6FDA0489273,big states ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a3f3ca9ef32d,E6FDA0489273,and it aviods run off elections. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9e89d0804d1f,E6FDA0489273,"For example when president Obama ran his electoral votes equaled 61.7 percent, but his popular vote only equaled 51.3 percent. If your a fan of Obama then you should love the fact that we use electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+61639ec6a282,E6FDA0489273,"A trans-regional vote means that if a president was popular in, lets say the south, but not in the west and only the south voted for him then he/she could not be elected. A candidate must have a widely spread out amount of votes across the regions in order to be elected president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ec5f3bc01a45,E6FDA0489273,There are such things as swing states. Swing states mean that the state is made up of people who are democratic and republican so the state has a mixed variety of voters. Candidates spend a lot of time campagning in these swing states to try and persuade the voters in the state into their favor. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7c6c114dbfa4,E6FDA0489273,in electoral voting the size and population of a state matters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+124c762b6115,E6FDA0489273,"The more people you have in a state the more senators and people you get in the house of representatives which means that the state gets more votes towards who gets elected. A state like Florida will have more votes then a place like Maine. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+33b90bda3d1c,E6FDA0489273,Electoral college is the way to go when it comes to voting for our presendent. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+eb07bc1bd695,E721598E54AB,"""It's offcial: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" (Plumer, Source 2). Many do not like the electoral college for these reasons and many others such as it can be a distaster or because it is just plain dumb. Also there are a few reasons why the electoral college should be kept such as avoiding run-off elections or big states, but those not in favor of it out weigh those in favor of it. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+a54884b59835,E721598E54AB,The people who despise the electoral college are in favor of popular vote since it is the better choice. ,Position,Effective,,,
+5a4b59532e87,E721598E54AB,For various reasons the electoral college is unfair such as not everyones decisions count just those few people in the electoral collge. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7d504779de69,E721598E54AB,In a popular vote election everyones vote counts not just those who are considered better than us because they hold authority over people. Those people can also be sneaky and can change votes to be in favor of their choice of president. They will even take bribes sometimes just becuase they can even though us other people do count. ,Evidence,Effective,,,
+0b6fbfa70e43,E721598E54AB,The system should not even be here today because it is outdated way past our time. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cf8fec3d29c2,E721598E54AB,"""It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolsi the electoral college!"" (Plumer, Source 2) and many others do agree with this statement because it rather true that we do so instead of let a bunch of monkeys run our states and country, but I am pretty sure that sometimes they could even do a better job than those in office right now. "".....over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now"" (Plumer, Source 2) every day as we continue that percentage continues to grow and that data was recorded in 2000. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+75abd79a5b20,E721598E54AB,"Lastly, the electoral college is irrational ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+5998b846aa6b,E721598E54AB,"""Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president........Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, soemtimes the presidential candidate themselves. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. DO voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candiate? Sometimes"" (Plumer, Source 2) I know this statement says it all becuase how could one simply not want popular vote after reading this. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+39516c2a81f0,E721598E54AB,"I know that electoral college vote can help and not cause problems, but there are more problems while there is one easy fix which is popular vote. ""It's offcial: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational"" (Plumer, Source 2).              ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+8c71ec26a4db,E726C5DDAD9F,"I believe everyone should be required to do at least 24 hours of community service each year.
+
+That's adds up to only one day of your 365 day year. ",Position,Effective,,,
+e34eacee44cd,E726C5DDAD9F,It is not asking for a lot from the us to sacrifice one day. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+0ac88bc12368,E726C5DDAD9F,"I think if you want to do more than 24 hours of service, go right ahead that would be even better.
+
+If 1,000 students each help out for a day, that would be 24,000 hours of community service!
+
+That could make a huge impact in our community. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+84e3c26fb8ee,E726C5DDAD9F,"I know some people would still disagree and not do this, but as a second option you can make them do a large project that would take them a lot longer than a day. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b3e0e3996f97,E726C5DDAD9F,"I don't know too many people that would much rather do a huge project rather than sacrifice a total of two, maybe three whole days to help out their community.
+
+It wouldn't take long at all.
+
+It could be as easy as picking up some trash in the local park or, if you want to you can be able to tutor kids or help out kids with a disability.
+
+Either way, you are going to help out the community in a positive way. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+822290421055,E726C5DDAD9F,"Just imagine, what we could be able to do if our whole school were to chip in 24 hours of community service. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a82838144f32,E726C5DDAD9F,"We could do so much if we were to put this rule into our school program.
+
+I do community service every year just to help out the community without being required to do it.
+
+I have cleaned up the park, helped make sandwiches for the homeless, helped kids with disabilities.
+
+I can only imagine how much this could change our community if everybody in our school were required to do this.
+
+People that we would be helping would be so grateful.
+
+We as a school could become the school that everyone talks so greatly about.
+
+We could start promoting this idea around school by hanging posters up, handing out flyers, reminding people on the morning and afternoon announcements. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a54849403a8d,E726C5DDAD9F,"If you get behind my idea, I know students and teachers will follow us and make a huge difference in our community.
+
+We could even send out e-mails to each student's parents telling them of this idea.
+
+If the parents find out about this, I believe they will certainly force their kids to take part in a small amount of community service.
+
+All I am asking from you, is to just enforce this one little rule into our school.
+
+It could change lives.
+
+I am not asking for everybody to do a whole lot, just 24 hours of your life to help out the community.
+
+There are so many opportunities for our students to help out our community.
+
+Who knows, maybe you could save somebody's life while doing the community service. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+a305f3f3fd51,E73329DA93D6,Dear mr. senator i think that we should keep the electoral college eclections. I believe the electoral college is a better system than any other. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3ff5c4e756ce,E73329DA93D6,Some of my reasoning is it is the easiest way to elect someone. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+2233610f8f31,E73329DA93D6,Second reason is it is very fast quick to elect. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7d075253a288,E73329DA93D6,Final reason is it work fine. My mom always tells me you dont fix whats not broke. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+08913cb93154,E73329DA93D6,This method has worked for a very long time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+86c9f7e1fea1,E73329DA93D6,If a method like this has worked thid long i think we should keep it until it doesnt work. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+83d8c42d259a,E73329DA93D6,Then when it stops working we could start a new type of election. Many people have used this type of election the whole life and we still use it today so i think we should keep this way of our elections. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fd7b9e8e626d,E73329DA93D6,The first reason is it one of the easiest ways to elcet. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+df550d3da8bb,E73329DA93D6,"In the story it says the ""electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors is where they vote for the president and vice president , and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+5cf7f3eca4dc,E73329DA93D6,My second reason is it is very fast. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0849db2afed5,E73329DA93D6,They get the electoral votes in and start counting. Within a couple of hours they have tha answer. they can find out who wins in just a couple of weeks. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c617c7730cd3,E73329DA93D6,My final reason is it works good. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+15c70674ed47,E73329DA93D6,If it didn't work good it still wouldn't be around today. in the story it says that the electoral college was established by our founding fathers. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+721633ed86e1,E73329DA93D6,So i think this is the process we should use to elect our people even if it is still an old way of doing things.  ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d6f98e09105,E740029E13D1,"The United States has ways of being civilaized, and thats by electing leaders. Those leaders that take role of the responsiblitiy are President. Presidents need candidates to vote for them. The only way the President will get elected is by the Electoral College or by popular vote. Although both ways are effective, only one way is the best. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3fa054b78495,E740029E13D1,The U.S should stick with the Electoral College ,Position,Effective,,,
+89f1006f5839,E740029E13D1,because its a game changer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+39a1337560c0,E740029E13D1,trust worthy. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1dcf96db597b,E740029E13D1,To start off the Electoral College is a game changer for Election Day ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4904c5a5d2a9,E740029E13D1,"In the article "" In Defenese of the Electoral College"" the author states a good claim. Richard states "" the reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote"". From this quote Richard points out the even when a candidate has a good amount of  popular vote it all comes down to the Electoral College. The reason is the Electoral College is part of the candidate's team, whether its Democrat or Republican. In the article from Richard he gave an example, "" Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney"". In this peice of information Richard clearly states on how the Electoral College is stronger then the popular votes. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9d8d0c17b8c3,E740029E13D1,"Now in the article ""the indfensible Electoral College"" which was written by Bradford has a different claim. Bradford states "" because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning"". From this Bradford wants to express that the Electoral College is not fair to voters, and that it has cheesy methods. ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+3fed2b394bc4,E740029E13D1,"But even thought Bradfort disagrees with the method, Bradfort still stated the obvious. In the article Plumer states "" taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency"". Although Plumer disagree with the electoral college, Bradford still notices on how the electoral college makes a huge difference. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+fc67fa5daf47,E740029E13D1,"Also it was like the first method to be used. In the first source ""What is the Electoral College"", the author gives some great information. The office states "" the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their resposibilities are"". In this statement the Office is stating on how whichever party a person might be in, the electoral college will come through. The reason is because each state has an Electoral college and those states are in differnet parties. If the state that a person might live in is Democrat then the electoral college will go for that party, and same thing for the Republican party. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ece55cfbf6c6,E740029E13D1,"From the other side of Bradford again wants a comeback. In his article Bradford states ""in the same vein, faithless electors have occasionally refuesd to vote for their party's candidate"". ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c4707bd40eed,E740029E13D1,"Now no one would know if this is true but the electors might have their reasons. But Richard A. Posner comes back and states ""no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. In this quote its supports the fact that the electors do choose who they please. Plus this makes it fair because candidates wont be getting votes all over the places. Also the electoral college will be trust wirthy because the college follows the majority of the people's vote, and then makes a vaild decision. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+20d5892cba57,E740029E13D1,All in all the Electoral College is just the better method of voting. The Electoral College will give what the people want. Also the electoral college  represents the states votes. The reason is because electoral colleges are game changers and a trust worthy method. Certainly it wll be easier to choose a president and break ties.    ,Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d87242d83649,E74E4865B395,Many schools throughout the world offer distance learning as an option for students to attend online classes ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+16c443f87106,E74E4865B395,Although online classes may be helpful for some students but I think its a bad idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+3aa15cc835f0,E74E4865B395,Many schools started online classes due to emergencies or some students arent able to attend school everyday ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+6fd82abcb5d5,E74E4865B395,"Some schools offer computers and laptops to students that attend their schools. Many students might not do their work at home due to internet problems or some students can't afford internet,or computers at their households ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3b72b6158936,E74E4865B395,"Many think distance learning is a bad option because students can easily get distracted at home while attenting online classes. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+498674b4e049,E74E4865B395,Also students won't able to get their work done at home due to distractions like watching TV while doing their homework or assignments ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+93567ebb2abd,E74E4865B395,"Although some may say online classes are helpful because students can do school work on their own time,they wont have to wait until a teacher gives them instructions for assignments ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+d015622c7c64,E74E4865B395,"But offering distance learning can cause students to do bad on their test,quizes,and homework because they'll need help throughout the assignments,multiple students may not have anyone to help them at home. Teachers may have a hard time video conferencing multiple students at the same time. Students might take advantages of online learning and start cheating at home while the teachers won't know. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+0c37e109011e,E74E4865B395,"Students also can invite their friends over their houses and work togather on assignments but they can also copy eachother on tests,quizes or even homework. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+aba9f8d4dc9c,E74E4865B395,"Students and teachers may also argue about this topic,some students and teacher might agree to offering distance learning because traveling would be easier due to online assignments. Distance learning can be done anywhere and anytime around the world. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e96b18bb06a6,E74E4865B395,"Handful of students might not take advantage of attending classes from home,students wouldn't use their time whisely due to many distraction ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c9cb8dccbe19,E74E4865B395,Offering distance learning classes from home can cause many students being able to stay at home everyday and not attend school. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f090c6b555d3,E74E4865B395,Many students and teachers are interested in attending classes from home or by online video conferencing. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3eeccd7cc6d8,E74E4865B395,"Students might prefer staying home and doing assignements instead of waking up for school early,they'll have a chance to sleep in and do school work in the afternoon or at night. Teachers can benefit from online classes because some teachers have young children that need caring and help,teachers will be able to easily take care of them while attending school from home. Teachers will able to teach a whole class while sitting on their couch and even while eating at home or at a restuarent. Being able to attend classes online for students is a great way because traveling far distances or for long period time can be easier,Students won't have excuses on why their assignements weren't done. Students can easily work on their missing assignements because of the option of distance learning from home and being able to video conference teachers. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+3ed9d1aeb0fb,E74E4865B395,"Some Students and teachers might not prefer online video conferencing and might not feel comfortable speaking or showing their faces online. Distance learning can be a hard for students that travel to different areas around the world,internet can be a problem because some countries don't have internet connection or they have bad connection. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+91edbceb40e9,E74E4865B395,"Which might cause them not being able to video conference,or work on assignements and big projects that need high quality of internet connection. Many students learn better in person instead of using the computer or video conference. Throughout teaching assignements,teachers might have a hard time explaining or giving details about a specific topic through online classes because they might be used to speaking in front of a class in person. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1ce6687f32b5,E74E4865B395,"This is why many might prefer attending school instead of attending classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Many students might or might not benefit from being able to attend classes from home. But many students don't have a choice because many schools now offer distance learning for students around the world. Students from New York schools now have to attend online classes because of the Corona Virus,this caused a big impact on students who learn better in front of a teachers not through a computer or online conferencing.   ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9d3b8a6cef19,E7DFEA5C3B73,I'm against driveless development ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5adb129c67d9,E7DFEA5C3B73,"when it's snowing outside and you have to walk to school with no buses. mom and dad has to work,live a mile away. Or when your a senior in high school what's the point of doing drivers ed to drive. What if you get a job you far from there how are you going to get to work everyday on time so you want lose your job. If your grandma have to go to the doctor to old to ride the bus hows going to take her for life support. Some one in your family is having a baby and you call 911 they don't get there in time and you don't know how to deliver a baby the what.
+
+Anyone have a stroke in your family 911 doesn't t come in time chance the person dies cause you didn't have a car to save him or her. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+96f80788c1f5,E7DFEA5C3B73,People need cars for important thing in life with out cars the whole world will be walking there whole life. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a0f98292cf16,E7F9A77683D2,I would pick policy 1 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+bd3072241097,E7F9A77683D2,lunch is free time to eat talk to your friends and to use the restroom. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cb7a57fc0300,E7F9A77683D2,If u need to tell your mom something you can text her or call her but when your in class and u want to text someone you will miss the work and you won't know how to do the activity because your texting. When you have free time that's when you can text call but not in class because if you do then we won't know how to do the work and we would get a bad grade. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+24f49bb3c815,E7F9A77683D2,"So when it's after school lunch or your free time you can use a phone but when your in class you need to turn it off because your teacher is trying to teach you something. When your in class every day you know something new about something, someone, somewhere. So when your in class no phones when your out of class you can text make a phone call take pictures of friends. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e07563c80d1e,E7F9A77683D2,Who wants to pass i know i do because i want to get a good job because if you don. t pass your classes then you can't get a good job. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+dd981e783847,E8150D07AA28,I am against the development of these cars. I feel there is no purpose for these cars ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4528bbc7b50b,E8150D07AA28,You will still need a driver for these cars ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3e29d703523d,E8150D07AA28,These cars are a waste of money. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+086a3432e885,E8150D07AA28,These cars are also a waste of time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d8cc3f2df08,E8150D07AA28,"There is nothing wrong with reugular cars. We have been using regular cars for over 100 years, why stop now? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8651c9cdadf7,E8150D07AA28,these cars will still need a driver ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+354228282f94,E8150D07AA28,"According to the author, "" they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all designed to notify the driver. That defeats the purpose of calling them ""Driverless Cars."" Why call them driverless cars if they still need a driver. It is not a smart idea. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+20236224c684,E8150D07AA28,you are wasting money on something that is not effective ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+411b29420097,E8150D07AA28,"The name of the car does not match with the car itself. Why would you buy a "" Driverless car"" when the car is still going to need a driver. That is a waste of money. The ""Driverless Car"" will most likely be more expensive than a normal car. Although the car comes with more features, it does not live up to it's expectations. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4dedd73bd474,E8150D07AA28,the car is a waste of time. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0ad27f06bfd5,E8150D07AA28,"The U.S is mostly low and middle class people. The driverless car will not be sold as quickly as other cars because the prices of the car will most likely be a mini fortune. Not many people would buy this car. Not many people complain about cars today. People are so used to driving normal cars that they would probably rather drive than pay more money for a car that ""alerts"" the driver. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+169231d60a7d,E8150D07AA28,"I am against the development of this "" Driverless Car"". I think it is ineffective. It is a waste of money. The car is also a watse a time. You also willstill need a driver for this ""Driverless Car"" so there is no purpose of it. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+550987708f12,E81B29CC415E,"Driverless cars are too expensive, trivial, and dangerous to be developed for public use. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+b82b83040118,E81B29CC415E,"The development of these cars would require extensive funding, and this money could be much better spent. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8699bcda34b2,E81B29CC415E,"Some of these cars would only be partially automated and would still require a capable driver at all times, so what would be the point? ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1705c7d76978,E81B29CC415E,"Finally, driverless cars would be concerning from a safety standpoint - would these cars really be able to safely maneuver out of dangerous situations? 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+935a827f2999,E81B29CC415E,"Automated cars require many sensors and cameras that regular cars do not need, and even with these sensors, the cars are not capaple of completely driving themselves. In order to achieve a reliable driverless system, all of our roads would have to have electricity or magnets installed, which even the article admits would be ""too expensive to be practical"". Furthermore, the money spent on developing these cars could be spent to help those who are less fortunate rather than creating new things for ourselves. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+835348176e0d,E81B29CC415E,"These cars would drive most of the time, but they would, ""notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents"". These cars would certainly be helpful, but what would be the point of having a self-driving car if you still have to watch the road as if you were driving yourself? Some manufacturers talk of adding, ""in-car entertainment and information systems,"" but if the driver were focused on these systems, would they be able to react quickly enough if the car approached a dangerous situation? 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ea0b7cf632b1,E81B29CC415E,"This question leads to what is probably the biggest issue with these cars: many developers of driverless cars claim that these vehicles would improve public transportation and, ""use half the fuel of today's taxis,"" but what about the safety of the passengers? A truly driverless car would leave its passengers helpless in the face of an impending accident, and the addition of entertainment systems for part-time drivers would likely not give the drivers enough of a warning to react in the case of an emergency situation. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2e66599d9053,E81B29CC415E,"driverless cars should not be developed on a large scale. The huge amount of money that would have to be spent to make these cars safe would be much better spent helping those in need. Furthermore, cars that only partially drive themselves seem to defeat the intended purpose of the driverless car, as well as raising some safety concerns. It would be extremely difficult for the car alone to avoid dangerous situations, and the addition of entertainment systems would limit how much time a driver would have to assess and respond to danger. In all, driverless cars are far too expensive, needless, and dangerous to be developed or produced on a large scale. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+eeff10b5fea8,E85C45D90D1D,"Briiiiiiiiing!
+
+The bell signals and the sound of shuffling papers and zipping bags begins as people pack up for their next class. The teacher bids farewell as their students trickle out the door into the busy hallway. Students chat as they meander to their next classroom. Settling down, they pull out their notebooks for their lesson. The teacher begins, interacting with them and receiving questions. While this seems like a standard snippet of a high school experience, there are many factors that would be lost if school began allowing the use of distance learning ",Lead,Effective,,,
+07b8436c3fbb,E85C45D90D1D,Students should be required to attend class in person ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f709aab0a864,E85C45D90D1D,"Through distance learning, students would be unable to retain scheduled attention ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+8eedd8df8e12,E85C45D90D1D,"would miss out on important activities. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+36a5f58288e2,E85C45D90D1D,"One thing that many students struggle with is attention. However, being in a classroom environment helps students maintain focus ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa7ed6dc32a6,E85C45D90D1D,"First of all, classrooms have a live, and trained teacher. Students are able to learn from someone that they get to know throughout the year. Interaction is easy with both the teacher, and with other students in the room. With a live teacher, the learner can ask and answer questions easily and receive personal attention concerning their individual issues with topics or assignments. This factor helps students maintain focus as they are able to quickly resolve confusion and the teacher can alert them if they begin to zone out or get distracted ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+31b93c1ac3dc,E85C45D90D1D,"Secondly, a schedule is very important in maintaining a balanced day. Having classes aligned for the week can enable students to practice time management and help them be alert for appropriate times throughout each day. To my friend, having a schedule is extremely important. Without one, she gets concerned that she will not be able to accomplish what needs to get done. To combat this fear, she creates lists, with scheduled times, that allow her align her personal schedule with her tasks. Similarly to my friend, students need to able to see what they need to learn in that day and get it done. They can work on getting to class on time, and due to breaks and meals throughout the day, they can relax knowing that their time is planned out for them. This ability is lost when students make choices as to when they feel like taking their online or video conference classes ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1e015df3510b,E85C45D90D1D,"Lastly, the school environment is made for learning. Classrooms have helpful posters and worksheets that guide students in their learning. The walls are usually soundproofed, and teachers help to prevent distractions. This setup is in direct contrast to a home environment. Also, being present in the classroom helps to prevent technology malfunctions and poor connection that could be disruptive or deteriorate the student's ability to learn. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2505fad07b70,E85C45D90D1D,"When using distance learning, students lose the ability to participate in many activities that are both crucial and embellishing to school life. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+11d744565fd1,E85C45D90D1D,"For example, for science classes, participating in labs helps develop the understanding of the material and helps learners of all types, such as visual, auditory and kinetic. In other classes such as the humanities, seminars and workshops are important. These activities are inhibited when a student uses an online learning platform ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c767fb0c7134,E85C45D90D1D,"Also, people think in a variety of ways. When put together, they can combine ideas and think about topics from different angles. Teachers often create group assignments to enable students to think together. This is extremely difficult to do when a student does not attend class in a classroom. Similarly, students are unable to join clubs, and are limited in their extracurricular activities, such as sports. These entertaining experiences help students unwind while doing something they enjoy. In the case of sports, exercise helps create endorphins that make a student happier and healthier. Clubs allow students to branch out in their interests and take action in issues that are important to them. I started a club which allowed me to combine my love for music and community service. This helped improve my school experience. Opportunities like these are limited when classes are taken through technology ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+17dd46b8844e,E85C45D90D1D,"Lastly, many school strive to have entertaining activities for students to do with friends. My school does fairs, bake-offs, karaoke, and volleyball scrimmages. We also have an entire week in which students can wear funny outfits that coincide with a theme. It is a way to spend time with friends and try something new. When a student takes classes at home, they are unable to participate in these diverse and exciting events. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+6dc475302739,E85C45D90D1D,"Some people may counter this viewpoint in many ways. For instance, students are better able to learn in their home because they are comfortable. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+214894775c2f,E85C45D90D1D,"It is true that students are able to be more comfortable at home by having a choice in what they wear, where they sit, or when they take the classes, but this is often a negative factor. Being too comfortable can be distracting and it does not benefit the learning experience. The brain tells the body that it is at home and it can cause the mind to be less focused. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+19daaada5d7e,E85C45D90D1D,"Also, as students attend school, they begin to become more accustomed to the environment there and it becomes more comfortable to them ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f226431154e6,E85C45D90D1D,Another viewpoint is that students will have fewer distractions at home. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+b26cd8c38b79,E85C45D90D1D,"While there may not be other students there, there are pets, family, and objects that can be destructive to learning and attention. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c906d1850d95,E85C45D90D1D,"While distance learning may sound productive and helpful, in reality, it lessens the ability for students to learn. They lose the ability to get proper instruction, participate in activities, have a scheduled day, and have a necessary learning environment. As technology becomes increasingly popular, students begin to lose important connections with peers and family. To prevent this from happening in schools, students need to be present for class. To create the best learning environment for everyone, a classroom experience trumps the use of online learning. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+f9d4a69d8ec3,E862C9EC5EC5,The electoral college is a thought that came up long ago by our founding fathers ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+727dc62183c9,E862C9EC5EC5,Many people calim that it is antiqiuated and needs to be updated but I dissagree. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+93db4c7057ec,E862C9EC5EC5,"Although we are the ""Democracy of the USA"" we are really a republic (chosing representives to vote for us!) This system is much more effective then an ATCHUAL democracy ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+497f3244f121,E862C9EC5EC5,"Just imagine if on every single issue every single person would have to vote on the outcome to pass anything would take such a long time. Including the elections, the electoral college makes a short sweet way for voting, the population votes and then they vote for what we voted for (most of the time...) ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+bfa958d209a0,E862C9EC5EC5,Some people don't trust the electorates with this kind of power ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4580dbf7e59b,E862C9EC5EC5,but I belive that those people are just parnoid pessmist and need to learn to have more faith in the people that we elect or the president appoints. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+b74e817af73a,E862C9EC5EC5,The only flaw I see is the even number which calls for a tie. Also the winner takes all system should be changes ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+74374bfaa784,E862C9EC5EC5,"I belive that each of the electorates should only have a certin percentage of the votes example: Alaska has 3 electorates, each are assigned 33.33333...% of the population and of course due to the decimals one electorate will have a bit more votes all the votes are then added. 76% voted Republican while 22% voted Democrat and the remaining 2% voted for third parties then the first elector would recive the votes of the 22% and the 2% and do fill up the rest of his 33% he would have 9% Republican his vote goes to the Democrates but the other two are left with only Republicans so there are 2 votes for republicans and the learger the population the more electors because of the increased ammount of citizens that each elector votes on behalf. This way the indivaduals that voted democrate are shown but did not really make as much an impact but it shows and may decide the out come during a tie ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f870e84cae3c,E862C9EC5EC5,"The electoral college Is a clean cut way for voting quick effective. Although we may not be a democracy per say we are all accounted for, just a few tweaks and it'll be perfect.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f5deff0c2116,E87BDAB97148,Yes they should change to a election by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+74b5246acdaf,E87BDAB97148,They should change to this because then they will know the actual amount of votes. And because they can see how many people want that person to become president instead of the electors because what if one of the electors changes their mind and goes for another person. Then that person can't revote and they are stuck voting for the person they do not want. And if it is changed it may cause problems politically. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+42cfe80d4066,E87BDAB97148,The reason why people would most likely not want to change it because they might like voting for an elector and because they might think it is much easier and wont take as long to choose the president. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+cac24db239b8,E87BDAB97148,Also the Louisiana legislature might replace the electors with new electors who would vote for John F. Kennedy. And that would be unfair because the popular vote would not really be for John F. Kennedy. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+86fb311aae83,E87BDAB97148,Also there could be a tie in the electoral vote instead of a winner sometimes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+49fdda4f3e6c,E87BDAB97148,Then the House of Representatives would have to vote if that did happen. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2401cf3dc1c9,E87BDAB97148,The electoral college is proven to be unfair to voters because of the winner takes all system ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+531a2845fb32,E87BDAB97148,"And so the dont spend time in the states because they know they have no chance in winning. And the state might pick a elector that they do not like by accident and mess up their vote. And the electors can only be people not holding public office. They might also choose a certain president because of his or her race.
+
+And the thing is that the people do not choose the president the electors elect the president. Sometimes but it hardly ever happens, the elector chosen would change their vote to the other president. It depends on the state on who would most likely become president because the more people the bigger the vote will be. Also the electoral college method might turn of certain voters. And sometimes no candidate wins the majority vote and this causes pressure and makes it complicated to elect the president.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9a99e5644607,E899EF61626A,"Do you know what is Electoral College? Electoral College is the process of election of the President by a vote in Congress. Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. Most states have a 'winner-take-all"" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. A Certificate of Ascertainment declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent yor state. Smetimes could not be the best choice for our country. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+c5fdef7f12cc,E899EF61626A,I strongly disagree that keeping the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+7c84c2716624,E899EF61626A,it is unfair to voters ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+06381bcebaf8,E899EF61626A,"it can cause problems in your state. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+66a77dca9af4,E899EF61626A,"To begin with, I strongly believe state senator should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States because Electoral College is unfair to voters. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f21276f2a77d,E899EF61626A,"From the text says ""candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning.""Meaning the winner take all system, which is unfair. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including the states Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+cb2a7b6e5197,E899EF61626A,"Secondly, I strongly believe state senator should change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States because it can cause problems in your state. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6e13fa375859,E899EF61626A,"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors. Statisics show that Congress would get 34 electoral votes but they aren't really voting for the president. For Instance, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters. That many voters vote on one party for president and another for Congress. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fdfb6e7d9b99,E899EF61626A,"I strongly disagree, that state senator should change the election by popular vote because electoral college is a better way to vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+4573f9b65d3d,E899EF61626A,"The Electoral College is widely regardes a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed. For example, In 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1d8ed24d6b89,E899EF61626A,The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans regional appeal. The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+7f1fe081ced1,E899EF61626A,"In Conclusion, the Electoral College is a process of election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. I strongly believe that state senator should change the election by popular vote for the prsident of United States because electoral college is unfair to voters and it can cause problems in your state. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3a1e8582a762,E8BDF53BAAA4,"In my favor, i bielive that popular vote, for electing the president of United States Of America, is the best choice for election. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+82cb0d0a4790,E8BDF53BAAA4,"Every thing is for the people right? Give the people what they want. If majority votes a certain somthing, such as the president, shouldnt the people be able to get what they want, its for for the people right? ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+45b6874bcd93,E8BDF53BAAA4,"No one is going to vote for somthing as impotant as this for no good reason. They vote and agree for whatever gives them the best intentions. Why disatisfy the people? Shouldnt they get what they want? I mean its for the people isint it? If so, then popular election it is. Think about it. The whole point of even having a president is to control and keep the United States Of America happy. Why do the oppisite? If the people are happy, and there is a comander in cheif, then its a win win situation. Every ones happy. The whole point. Why would anyone try to mess that up and change things causing chaos and unhappiness? I thought it was for the people not aginst the people. Im not wrong, and if it changes and the people are unhappy, do you really think thats going to have a positive impact on the economy and society? Unhapiness, living under terms and conditions thats in no ones favor. Sounds nice ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+727ee02903a6,E8BDF53BAAA4,Overall I think that popular vote is the choice to go with for electing our future President of the United States Of America. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+ff159fe1a21c,E8D0E2444ADD,Do you know what the electoral college is? I didn't know what it was or what it did until the seventh grade. Well if you don't know what it is it's a group of 538 people who vote for the next president of the United States. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+f008f28b4d38,E8D0E2444ADD,But I don't think we should vote for a president like this. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a110cf86001f,E8D0E2444ADD,First of all I think it removes our voting right as an American citizen ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7498c022696a,E8D0E2444ADD,"Some of you are probably asking yourselfe, ""how does this remove your right to vote?"" Well you see if the Electoral college votes and whoever they vote for wins. Your basically voting for nothing because the Electoral College is basically the vote that counts twords the election. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+df9fb3ded721,E8D0E2444ADD,Another thing I would want to change is if the Electoral College is the main vote we should just not vote. Whats the point in wasting our time to vote if it doesent even count ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+77f891f600e0,E8D0E2444ADD,I thi9nk voting should be by popular vote because it lets the citizens choose who they want there leader to be. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+33e71363f969,E8D0E2444ADD,Finally I think If we could choose the president it would be better becuse the people would get what they want ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+50faa6b0b292,E8D0E2444ADD,If they dont get to choose there leader than there is no point in doing this stuff at all. This should be a real democracy and let the people vote. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+360f3a998d08,E8D0E2444ADD,In general I think voting should be by popular choice and not by the electoral college. As the people of the United States we need to vote for our leaders and keep our rights to vote in this country. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+deb2057d6394,E9026A3D93B7,I believe that you should have the students perform community service. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6dd9f4e0958b,E9026A3D93B7,I think that community service is very important ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+590c26344bb6,E9026A3D93B7,some of the other students think it is a complete waste of time ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a38482c98750,E9026A3D93B7,"So I would like to add a ""trash clean-up"" project for the students who do nothing, or want to help out the school during recess time. It will be on or around campus during the lunch period for fifteen minutes a day. Then the next few days after the school is cleaned up, we should have ""reading buddies"" for students in preschool and kindergarten ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fe5ff8fcae7f,E9026A3D93B7,"it will give younger students a larger vocabulary, and give the older students higher social skills. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f70ae2256f24,E9026A3D93B7,"I clean up the playground during recess, read to students, and I bake cookies for the elderly people at the local retirement home. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+1431c25aaef4,E9026A3D93B7,"They can do those for the community service you want the students to do at school, and give us a better outlook on life. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+7d998e58de38,E9739967700C,I prefer policy 1 because i think we should be able to use are cell phones at lunch and other free times ,Position,Adequate,,,
+30fb7003f7ff,E9739967700C,"and because sometimes it gets boring at lunch and i just feel like texting as long as its turned off in class i think we should have them and i think that its crazy because were almost grown and we still have to put phones in the lockers and another reason why i think we should have phones is because what if the school or something happen to the school i wont be able to keep in touch with her and i think some boys try to get a girl number at lunch time so we should have are phones instead of waiting until the afternoon so i can write it down on a slip of paper and i think we should because and because what if we are sick or don't feel good and the teacher wont let us go to the nurse then i should be able to text my mother and tell her that im sick can you come pick me up or bring me some medicine and having a phone in the lunch is phone because when you just feel like you don't wont to be bothered then you can plug in some earphones to your phone listen to music and eat so yes TEACHER_NAME 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9bc9ed68db52,E9739967700C,i think we should be able to have phones during lunch and any free time we get. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d04ab316e839,E97A5C116E30,"Imagine you were a kid at school, and you forgot it was a shortened day. You need to call your parents but, no, you can't because your principal decided to ban cell phones all together. Now what? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1aaa7b08fa1b,E97A5C116E30,I strongly support Policy 1 ,Position,Adequate,,,
+1486ee37d720,E97A5C116E30,In case of emergencies ,Claim,Effective,,,
+664c8bfe52e5,E97A5C116E30,"even to make sure of an after-school event, phones could be in great use. With Policy 2 in act, you could be staying in school for many hours until your ride picks you up. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cdc0841ef37b,E97A5C116E30,"In case of an emergency, a phone would be great to have. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+38779469eb33,E97A5C116E30,"What if, during lunch, my friend breaks a bone or gets an asthma attack. There would be no time to call a teacher for help and even if they did come, what would they do for help? Any student's first instinct would be to take out their phone and call 911. Once your done with that, you tell your friend to call a teacher from somewhere so that they can handle the situation. ""Whew,"" you say. ""thankfully I had my cell phone."" ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f5c1a72cae0d,E97A5C116E30,Another reason why having a functional mobile at school would be nice to have: a ride. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e019c9c7326c,E97A5C116E30,"I forgot I had basketball practice at the gym after school and what should I do? You can simply call your ride and telling them they need to come later. What if your ride was your mom and you didn't have your phone because you didn't want any phones in your school? Well I can almost imagine what will happen next: my mom comes to pick me up, she doesn't find me, and every mom's first reaction to this mishap will be, ""MY SON/DAUGHTER HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED!"" This ""exciting"" commotion happened because you decided to go with Policy 2. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+19d5bcbc8098,E97A5C116E30,"Please consider this letter because if you don't, before you know it, our school's phone bill will increase because students will be needing to use school phones to call people. With this, our budget will decrease, leaving the school left with no money for more important reasons. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+3b2e52c86aaa,E9826DEAFF5F,I think that they should keep our despised method of choosing the president. The way we choose our president every 8 years is okay. Nothing is wrong with they way we change our presidents. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+45e5c690c063,E9826DEAFF5F,The electoral votes has done a great job with no complaints. The way now has been going for a long time and they shouldn't change it. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a240da92458d,E9826DEAFF5F,"The electoral college consists of many electorals. They consist of 538 electorals. Majority of the electoral votesare 270, which is required to elect the President. Under the 23rd Admendment of the Constitution, the District of Cloumbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state on purposes of the Electoral College.
+
+Each canidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors.
+
+Afte the presidential election, your governor prepares a ""Certificate of Ascertainment "" listing all of the candidates who ran for President n your state along with the names of their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential canidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year.
+
+Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but forr aslate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry,you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democtratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election,they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes.
+
+It can be argues that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candiate who has no hope of carrying their state-Democrats on Texas,for example, or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked up by popular vote. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83b2be1e143e,E98F49492C8B,I think that your fist policy is the best ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5a41bcd616c7,E98F49492C8B,because if kids don't bring their phones to school then well they are not be able to call for help during a emergency like ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e89f32d585d8,E98F49492C8B,if the power went out or if the teacher is gone and there is a break in or if some staff member needs medial treatment and the power is out or if school gets out and a friend ask if you can come over after school ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4e8c29662291,E98F49492C8B,If you chooses the other on people are still going to bring their phones to school anyway so why not let them have it at school just have rules for them not consequences. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5456937f9af1,E98F49492C8B,Maybe if you let them more people will listen and not get in as much trouble. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+40cf6601b4fc,E98F49492C8B,If people start to listen then well people won't get suspended as much. Now if you choose the second policy then people will not listen and bring there phones to school and you would just be suspending kids who just brought their phone to school. You would have a lot more suspicions or detentions. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e8ac2ba4e86,E98F49492C8B,"If the first policy is chosen then you wouldn't have to keep nagging kids to put away their cell phones or stay all night and wait for parents to come pick up their kids cell phone. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0df7a121f0f8,E98F49492C8B,"If you pick the first policy the kids will be much happier and the parents happier they don't have to go pick up their kids phone. So please pick policy one. If you pick policy one then the kids will most likely like their principle and not hate her.
+
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+933599431d92,E9938C48F7AB,I think that we should keep this electoral college because the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+b6353e7709a6,E9938C48F7AB,On the other hand it would be way easier for people to vote. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+49ec725b1118,E9938C48F7AB,"Also a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. your states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation. Plus, each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. So this would be perfect for everyone to vote. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c6ea70fbc3d0,E9938C48F7AB,"After the presidential election, your governor prepares a ' certificate of Ascertainment' listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of theelectors in december of the election year. Your states certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national Archives as part of the offical records of the presidential election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ed0c6587ba0,E9938C48F7AB,"Also, most States have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all the electors to the winning presidential candidate. however, maine and Nebraska each have a variation of 'proportional representation'.
+
+Under the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral college. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word 'state' also refers to the district of columbia. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ecc7f6c75b93,E9938C48F7AB,"so i really do think that we should keep this it would be a really good thing to keep.
+
+but this is why i think that we should keep it. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+c0503dad5ae2,E9BB013E0F33,Gravin states that it reminds her\him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+981a175c05cf,E9BB013E0F33,I think that by reading this passage and knowing a litte bit about it before it is just a natural landform not created by aliens. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6f5a9db5d029,E9BB013E0F33,Aliens are not even real. People just think they are real. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0c126345da72,E9BB013E0F33,I think it is a natural landform because not even humans could make something that looks just like a persons head that good ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+b7f8297c545a,E9BB013E0F33,It might be from the Earths winds pushing the sand over and making it look like it a face. It also could be the gravitation pull of the Earth. I think that you should believe that is not aliens because if it was aliens dont you thinl they would be doing more than just that? That means if it reall the aliens who made this they must have a lot of thinking and knowledge about stuff like that. That also means that when earth moves the face moves with the Earth. Does this have anything to do with the man in the moon? ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f7db249f67cc,E9BB013E0F33,People probably think that it is made by aliens because people don't go to Mars. People that go to Mars have to be very brave and other things too. the camera has taken pictures because it has to have proof that it really does look like a face. I think again that it is just a landform that has been made over the pass years by the gratational pull and Earths winds.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+80d9b5fd898f,E9C3211DC772,I would rather want the changing of the election to popular vote because the Electoral college process causes many promblems ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ef9eedcf76a6,E9C3211DC772,First is that it consists of 538 electors and only 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1393d3346e76,E9C3211DC772,Also perhaps it leads into a tie in the electoral votings.... it could possibly lead into a deadlocked election ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1de6a6449341,E9C3211DC772,This process of electoral college does not give the full rights to the voters... its not fair. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1e4256cb0e4d,E9C3211DC772,538 electors is consisted of and only 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. this tells me that NO people can vote ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+0365c32a2651,E9C3211DC772,which really does not give you the right to do that because people have always that right to vote. In addition to that it can lead to a big catastrophe. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a7436b79b6f2,E9C3211DC772,The electoral college process is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f87989afe591,E9C3211DC772,"Also why, all that can lead into a tie in the electoral votings. Which equals into a deadlocked election ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+1c3eaf9dc8b0,E9C3211DC772,"Lastly, this process is outdated and irrational. arguments against direct elections are spurious and should completely vanish this process.    ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+cff601ab0c6d,E9D72176CA9A,"Community service is beneficial to many individuals, groups, and areas. It brings out the best in many people, including those who carry it out. It shows good personality and is superb for getting into college. However, if community service was to be necessary, then it would not be as beneficial. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+5695e2ded6f4,E9D72176CA9A,"If community service was mandatory, it would not be viewed as a nice thing, it would not be enjoyed by all, and would not be as beneficial to the community. 
+",Position,Effective,,,
+f48b23d4c5fe,E9D72176CA9A,"To begin with, community service would not be viewed as such a nice thing if it were required. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1a26b93fdd73,E9D72176CA9A,"For example, two schools in an area have their 8th grade students do at least an hour of community service a day. Eventually, people would forget how nice it is because it would become a usual thing around the town. This shows that if everyone in 8th grade performed community service daily, or even weekly, citizens would view it as the students doing what they need to do, rather than how nice those students are. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+695f4dbbdeb0,E9D72176CA9A,"Furthermore, community service is done by those who enjoy helping others. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8443390ef957,E9D72176CA9A,"If all 8th graders had to do it then it would not bring out the best in them and would be dreaded by some.
+
+Supporting this, the whole 8th grade of 120 students have to do an hour of community service a day. 40 out of the 120 do not like the labor and dread it, causing them to have the thought of community service in their heads the whole day. This would cause changes in attitudes throughout daily life . In addition, it would lead to bad attitudes towards helping the community and bad habits for the future. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f02018b1b611,E9D72176CA9A,"Finally, citizens would not view community service as beneficial for the community as they do now. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+bde3de67e110,E9D72176CA9A,"For example, all the students of the 8th grade work every day for six months for the community. As the seventh month approaches, civilians cease to realize how helpful community service is because they are so used to it. This concept is the same as taking the ability to walk for granted. It demonstrates that when people are used to something, they begin to take it for granted. This will eventually result in little or no appreciation of community service. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+089a9be0ed1a,E9D72176CA9A,"Helping the community is great for personality, beneficial to the community, and excellent on a resume. If it became required for even just 8th graders, then community service would negatively change completely. In addition to community service itself changing, personality within students and some citizens will change, regarding community service. It is important to not take community service for granted because it helps the community and brings out the best in people. 
+",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2e52f33811c1,EA1D34C41DE6,"the Electoral College has always been a good way to elect our leaders, and it is the best way to do it ",Position,Effective,,,
+3d475effef4b,EA1D34C41DE6,It has the ability to use swing states for better voting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+18a79516fe56,EA1D34C41DE6,"larger and smaller states get diffrent amounts of electoral votes, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bc7d305d2301,EA1D34C41DE6,"and presidents cannot be elected by a region alone. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9becb2b9d5bb,EA1D34C41DE6,The effect of having swing states because of the Electoral College is a positive one ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+72832c379068,EA1D34C41DE6,"because when a state feels like they have a chance of having their candidate win, they put more thought into the vote they cast knowing that their vote counts. Having voters put more thought into their votes instead of not caring as much gives the better candidate a greater chance of winning, if one candidate was truly better than the other. The more thoughtfull canidates in a swing state will pull more information from the candidates campaigns. Popular vote does not use the winner takes all method so the idea of swing states will no longer have any effect in the election. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+54b02dd5c4ad,EA1D34C41DE6,Another great reason why the Electoral College is better than popular vote is because depending on the size of the states a certain amount of votes is given to the electors. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b5bc899ee75c,EA1D34C41DE6,Larger states get more attention from presidential candidates because of the majority vote in the particular state. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b85632e13616,EA1D34C41DE6,if there was only popular vote then presidential candidates could waste their time on smaller states when they could of been winning larger states. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cf003e941d5b,EA1D34C41DE6,"The varying amount of electoral votes for each state depending on its size also allows for a more equal and fair election, due to the less populated states not being able to have more electoral votes then the more populated states. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b19e55d18844,EA1D34C41DE6,The Electoral College allows that presidential canidates cannot win the election by reigional appeal. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1fb9b5d90656,EA1D34C41DE6,This means that if a particular reigion favors a candidate they cannot win by only a single regions votes. This makes the candidates campaign less in regions that are more likely to be won and more in other regions. But with the Electoral College this makes it harder for a candidate with only regional appeal to win because other regions feel like their votes will not be as effective towards the election. With popular vote a presidential candidate will not know where to campaign and where not because there is no winner take all method. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f986bf1b3f15,EA1D34C41DE6,This is why I belive that having the Electoral College is superior to popular vote when we the people vote for presidential candidates.          ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b19b17324069,EA234C38C696,Theres so many positive and negative when we imagine the idea of driverless cars. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d4361dcb28e8,EA234C38C696,I believe that driverless cars are very dangerous and can cause many conflicts. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+ca5b452c352c,EA234C38C696,"I know that even with the law of don't text and drive, people still do those things. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+286a02b4ae5b,EA234C38C696,", if we allow driverless cars I know that people who are tired from work are going to fall asleep knowign the car is in control, but at the end when theres trouble, they will still be asleep ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7ac3353e07f,EA234C38C696,"I believe that people will start sueing companies and people will not feel confortable of being stalked while driving. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ff633167cba8,EA234C38C696,there are many reckless drivers around us anyhow. How can we be sure that we are safe when driving? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b9d158087159,EA234C38C696,"In the passage "" something not avaible to the drivers trying to text with a cell phone."" I can not imagine but we do know for a fact that texting and driving is very dangerious but there are also people who are out there doing it. These situations can lead to mass accidents. If you are given the chance that your car does not need you and you do get bored off of the heads up display, what would you really do? Since our society is all about iphones and samsung , I do not think that its safe to be in a car with your cell phones on. I sense that teenagers are especially going to disobey the law because they just tend to think its going to be okay, which in reality its not. We should be very concerned of everyone driving safetly. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+49351e88e9bc,EA234C38C696,I believe that exuausted and drunk people are going to take this advantage of having driverless cars. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+29d1c558f53c,EA234C38C696,"What if you car needs your help, and youre asleep and that you're too drunk to get self concious? This will lead to more troubles because than people that are drunk will still drive and think that their car has it all in control.""They can steer ,accelerate, and brake themself, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills"" The driverless can be very dangerious if in case in need of a human skill if someone is really tired and drunk. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+82918f477a84,EA234C38C696,I believe that your rights are being taken away when you're beign stalked on while driving. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b69fd1247203,EA234C38C696,"I wouldnt want to be stalked on when i'm driving or anything. it violates someones privacy when youre watching them because some people od have to do certain things when they are parked for example like having to use an emergency or changing clothes. ""While the driver watches the road , the car watches the driver"" Do you really think that drivers are going to watch the road when they dont have to? I also believe that peopel will start sueing companies because who is at fault if theres an injury or accident?""if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is al fault- the driver or the manufacturer? I think that people who are being responsible and driving with great cautions will be upset and it would not be fair to them if they are under control of their own car and than there is someone els thats not drving but lettign their car being controled by a computer than they get in an accidents. I do knwo that there are accidents from many reasons, but I believe that driverless cars can cause a lot of problems. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9076ccdb4a6f,EA234C38C696,"I do not agree the fact that driverless cars should be allowed. It has many safety issues for the community and it will cause a lot of problems. It will violate someones privacy,someone can take advantage of driverless cars when they are drunk or tired, and lastly peopel will be upset. I think it depends on the indivuals who are driving. People should start caring more for others when driving because someones life can be at risk if they driver recklessly.
+
+Driverless cars will lead into many big problems as well as to many life lost if youre not prepared when your car needs you. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+452007cdde63,EA426FFE25E5,"With the face on mars no one belived that it was actually a face they thought that it was and ancient monument on mars and when NASA first saw the face on mars they thought that it was the landging place of the viking 1's sister ship the viking 2. Then when they put that photo out of the face on mars people were using it in haunted grocery stores checkout lines, radio talk shows, magazines, books, and hollywood films.
+
+Then even some scientists belived that they face was an alien artifact so when people did not belive them they went and took more picture of the face but it was mars cloudy day and people still did not belive them. So NASA went back for another one but to get a better picture they had to get closer to the face and role the ship twenty five degrees to the center they also had to go over the face very often because it was hard to get the picture.
+
+The spaceship would look over mars like a faxing machine but lucky for them going around the face very often it got to a point to were their was no clouds and they were able to get a good shot of the face. So NASA was able to get a better picture of the face so that people would belive them that it was a face in the surface on mars.
+
+The face was not accutally formed from the viking 2 but from a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hight as the Face on the moon. So the face on mars was alo just a huge rock formation and the eyes nose and mouth was just an illussion formed from a shadow. Also about the alien articact their was not one they thought that their was a hidden alien artifact and hidden alien marking hidden by the haze. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0080540d1d72,EA5BFD706570,"The topic of online learning is very controversial. Many schools offer online services to accommodate those who vary in schedules, need more time for assignments and comprehension, or even those who just work better alone. Now a days, schools are becoming more diverse in terms of the variation in which a student can learn. There are both current benefits and future benefits to online learning. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+a38ee8d74108,EA5BFD706570,"Although some people think students have no benefits from online learning, it should be known that students do in fact benefit from online learning. ",Position,Effective,,,
+f2481d542637,EA5BFD706570,There are several ways students can benefit from online education currently. One benefit being that it gives students the chance to work at their own pace and not feel pressured to keep up with the rest of the class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+133e99957a1b,EA5BFD706570,"This would've needed to be done, had learning been set in a classroom setting. For example, a student may not understand a concept in math and want to try and fully understand the concept before being tested on it. In schools currently, many students are being forced to take tests having not have comprehended the topic of study. This also leads to the problem of social influence on a students learning. As humans, we tend to conform to the rest of society and value deeply what society has to say about us. Students self-esteem and self-efficacy go down when they don't understand a topic. Students tend to not want to be the outcast when it comes to not understanding a topic, so they just go ahead with a test, which results in them doing poorly on because not enough time was given to them. Online school provides this option, so a student is not given a test before they thoroughly understand the concept ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+aa79d776bb64,EA5BFD706570,This also pertains to the flexibility of a student's schedule. Some students may switch to online learning due to sports and can't afford to be continuously missing school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7c94e13c4c3,EA5BFD706570,"For example, my friend Kady does gymnastics with me, and gymnastics meets happen almost every weekend. Online school is a great way for her to do school work on her own time, because work gets done depending on when she is available, aside from doing meets. There's less stress about having to do homework for the next day ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3982a81ca1db,EA5BFD706570,This leads me into another benefit to online learning. Another benefit to online learning would be that it is a potential stress reliever or minimizes stress. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e1deb66577f9,EA5BFD706570,"Many students may feel better and be less stressed doing homework or school work, because of being in the comfort of their own home or in a space that is safe for them. Students feel free to take breaks and not be restricted to the overcrowded rooms that are common in regular schools. It's also proven that surroundings have an effect on mood and willingness to learn. If the atmosphere of a classroom is sad, depressing, or gloomy, then students may have a gloomy or depressing attitude when in that class, hindering them from learning at their fullest potentials. With online schools, the student chooses their place of study and knows what places motivate them to create high quality work and retain the most information. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f07009f53c52,EA5BFD706570,There are also ways students can benefit from online education in the future. One benefit is that the student will be more independent. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1b172743669f,EA5BFD706570,"When doing online school, the student doesn't have access to a tangible teacher or access to a teacher 24/7. Sometimes students will have to wait for a teacher, if the teacher works for both online and public schools, to answer a question that the student has on a problem or concept. Sometimes students will have to figure out the concept themselves which develops their problem-solving skills. The independence and problem-solving skills can become useful later on when the student applies for a job. Many employers like employees who don't depend on the employer for everything but can try and solve problems on their own first. For example, when working at a McDonalds drive-thru with a line full of people, the employee doesn't have time to be asking the employer a series of questions if a problem occurs. Instead, the employee must find quick solutions and learn independence. The employee won't learn unless they try it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2930d8a8e3ad,EA5BFD706570,Another benefit to online education is the student learns time management and responsibility. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+259ebd3ac173,EA5BFD706570,"Although online education is flexible, school work still needs to be completed in a timely manner and it is the students responsibility to get it done, for there is no one around to set verbal due dates. Students still need to write papers in online school, but the only difference is there is no teacher to remind you of the due date and pressure you to complete it. Later in life, those online students are very aware of due dates and deadlines,for they have been accustomed to following them throughout their high school careers. Employers like employees who are punctual and have tasks or assignments done on time. This idea of time management also prepares the student for college if they choose to go to an actual college or university. Professors like assignments done on time and also won't give too many frequent reminders on when those assignments are due. Professors also like when students take accountability for their actions. It's not the teachers fault if work is not completed on time or is lost. The blame is solely put on the student. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+dc0c92cd8e19,EA5BFD706570,"Online schooling truly depends on the person at hand. What works for one person doesn't always work for another. Online school promotes both current and future benefits, as does public schools. There is no say in which one is better or worse. As individuals we are all different and possess different traits and qualities. With so many individuals in the world, it's important that we accommodate all people. A person may strive in one situation but stress in another. This means that online schooling should remain an option for students and families. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+076799e15aba,EAC3596461E7,Out of the two possible policies you are considering I would have to say that i favor the second ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6f2077c073d4,EAC3596461E7,The idea of allowing students to use cell phones during free time makes absolute sense ,Position,Adequate,,,
+eb15360a7679,EAC3596461E7,"Not allowing the phones during class time is respectable as well, that way the learning isn't affected. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+522842f6b8d2,EAC3596461E7,"During free time, students aren't putting their time into anything anyway. Letting them use their phones will have no affect what so ever or anything important, such as school work. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+eb56f4b586de,EAC3596461E7,There is really no downside to policy number one. It will make most students very pleased as well. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d43f0e62381d,EAC3596461E7,"Policy two however, I am against. The idea of no phones what so ever seems harsh and strict. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+bca79f53324a,EAC3596461E7,"What is the student is having a bad day and can't call a parents for a little help? That could affect how the learn in school, not being able to have outside connections. It would be like the student was in a cage for an entire school day, how would you feel to be locked up in a cage? The student's should be allowed their freedom. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ea9c2417e186,EAC3596461E7,"There is always a punishment for not following the rules, some will have to be thought of, of course, if the new policy that you choose is not followed. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5742d66d56e,EAC3596461E7,"Don't expect everything to run smooth at first, things may always be changed. Try out letting students use the phones during free time, it's just something new. It may lead to a happier environment, and maybe even better grades for students. Young people love freedom and being allowed to do what they want, giving them this freedom could have a tremendous outcome. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7ab7ac090b11,EAC3596461E7,"I am sure that you have many other things to think about, so, with that I give you, thank you and goodbye. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+9a926f76248a,EAD3F5B3AE77,Policy 1 i believe in cause everyone is already using phone during class or out of the class room even in lunch so policy 1 is better than policy 2. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+c3ec3088be27,EAD3F5B3AE77,The reason i pick policy 1 is people are using phone in school already and some times the teacher catch kids but some time they don't ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+5d70c74ec6f0,EAD3F5B3AE77,"i don't know we like our phone so we maybe want to use our phone anywhere, any day, any time that why u should let us our phones during school time. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+373b00837fea,EAD3F5B3AE77,"Second reason, i think it fair if we use our phones cause i bet all school in this world teacher use their phone that is a other reason. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+65170916bae0,EAD3F5B3AE77,it unfair that the grow ups can but not us they need to do theirs job then if we need to do ours job and i hope you think about that to see us feel about it. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d464585b47b4,EAD3F5B3AE77,"Third reason, kids get stuff done and they don't have nothing else to do instead let us use in that time and we will be little happy. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+a6fb388143ef,EAD3F5B3AE77,To some kids even care about their phone cause they are business but when they a free time they maybe use their phone also kids are smart the teacher wont notice we are ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ed74e00b20d5,EB16CD7EC3E6,"When someone thinks of the future, he or she may think of crazy gadgets that are made of technology years and years from our own time. However, humans aren't too far off from making these gadgets a reality. In particular, research and many tests concerning driverless cars have been happening for quite some time now. It gets people wondering though; does the development of these driverless cars reap more benefits than negatives? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4b160c91affc,EB16CD7EC3E6,"In my opinion, the development of driverless cars should be supported because of it will bring efficiency and safety for the entire human race. ",Position,Effective,,,
+66b273410ea8,EB16CD7EC3E6,the development of driverless cars can bring efficiency to the day-to-day life of an average human. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b7c8713274e8,EB16CD7EC3E6,"The vision for these cars is that they will be a part of, ""a public-transport taxi system. The cars [Google cofounder Sergey Brin] foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis."" The United States is one of the largest sources of oil consumption, and we tend to get all of our gas from other countries. With the direction these cars seem to be taking, we'd not only reduce the amount of gas we use in the United States, but in the entire world. We wouldn't be emitting nearly as much air pollution either. The benefit of public transportation is also significant due to the fact that, it too, decreases all of these factors. Based on my knowledge, most European countries tend to consume a lot less oil than the United States because they use public transportation. It's a lot more efficient than everyone owning an individual car and driving. By supporting the development of driverless cars, all of these imaginable benefits for the efficiency of transportation can become a reality. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+65d489e0eaf6,EB16CD7EC3E6,the development of driverless cars can aid in concerns of safety. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+c217aeb74023,EB16CD7EC3E6,"As the passage says, ""Within 10 years, [] sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers ... Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own."" This is extemely significant, seeing as how automobile accidents are one of the leading causes of death in the United States. With these driverless cars, people are able to step in when absolutely necessary; other than that, the car can sense most danger and avoid it. These cars so far allow for ""far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone."" We are already in a great spot as safety is concerned, and with further development comes even better improvements. If what Sergey Brin envisions becomes a reality, driverless cars could be the cause of a lot less death in automobile accidents worldwide. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f74f94f9567c,EB16CD7EC3E6,"the development of the driverless car has come very far in the very short time that it's been around. It's already allowed for a safer experience with automated brakes, multiple sensors, and notifications to the driver when something is wrong. With even further development than what we have already, safety could eventually not be a concern at all. With that being developed, so too are ways in efficiency and cost of transportation. By being for the development of driverless cars, so many significant benefits could be here in the years to come. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e43b7043c971,EB382D12574F,"DO YOU HAVE PROBLEMS WITH THE PRESIDENTIAL VOTE?
+
+At long on the History, There's strange and curios case in the story of the political, especialy in United State of America (U.S.A) The political allways had serius problems, like corruption, the confusion of what president choose, the bad counting vote, etc. But with all those problems that happens in the world.. How United States choose good presidents? First, we are going to talk about the curius case in the U.S.A talking about the political and how U.S.A choose the future president. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+d433821ce7f8,EB382D12574F,There's alot of curios case in the U.S.A. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+1852cce490be,EB382D12574F,"For example, it's said clearly in the article that for first time in the story of U.S.A there's 2 represents to be president that came from the state of Hawaii in 1960, and those represent was against Jhon F. Kennedy. Or the other case that the Electoral system in those times it was very confused and for each state it represents 1 vote so The legendary John Kerry wins 34 democratics votes. There was alot of controversy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4c4c3b5a33c2,EB382D12574F,"But with all those problems, how those U.S.A choose good there presidents? The goverment like there citizen have clearly 5 things (according the article wrote by Richard A. Posner) ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+7e99b96e9504,EB382D12574F,That are: ''Certainty of Outcome'' That is selecting a president that ougth to be who most votes receives is the winner. ''Everyone's President'' Means that is a resulr by a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president.''Swing State'' Is a method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates.''Big States'' Is a large state that gets more attention from presidentail candidates in a campaign than small state does.. And the last one is ''Avoid Run'off Elections'' That it could be argued method selecting the president may turn off by potential voters. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0fef7b7182c2,EB382D12574F,"In my opinion, i'm pro with. Is a very nice Goverment and Can helps every country in the world becouse there potential economic that they have.         ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+4eb97cb0168a,EB3D0704BCF0,They should do community service. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+b92e1ff8218c,EB3D0704BCF0,the people who love to do community service should get extra credit. They should also get extra time after and before school to hang out with their friends. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a48e104ffd7f,EB3D0704BCF0,"you ask why?? because they help a lot doing community service. cleaning up is good to the environment, but their wasting their time just doing the same thing over and over again. Like helping kids, is good to help them do better but you can get annoyed very easy. cleaning up the litter is good because if an animal eats aluminum foil it can choke and then die, you don't want that to happen right??? But the people who help should get day off of working and do school work, or help a teacher, that can be fun. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f28ce1c4c254,EB3D0704BCF0,"For the people who think community service is really weird, t ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+7cdb0b00588b,EB3D0704BCF0,"hey should think twice because it can be fun, but it helps a lot in life. It can help the fact that you can do something that helps. ......ALOT! like you can help at home. Earn cash, to buy cleaning supply's. That can help save animals, humans, life. But for the who don't care to help, you should help, do some community service. You can get extra credit, you can help little kids and save animals life's. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+e4ef34a73e12,EB3D0704BCF0,"Community service is actually pretty fun from experience, and i want to clean up litter. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+83f6c809a28e,EB3EBF4BB344,Do you really think aliens exist? It is belived by some that on mars aliens shaped a type of face on the planet. Others belive it is just a natural land form with a funny shape that looks like a face. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+ba28c6703c1a,EB3EBF4BB344,"If you are one of those people who think aliens shaped it you will think differnt by the time your done reading the essay. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+1559397e047a,EB3EBF4BB344,"Something very mystereous happened in mars 25 years ago. NASA discovered a landform in mars that looked like a very large face. When NASA looked closer in they decided it looked like a pharoh, which is like an old egyptian god. Ever since NASA revealed the mysterious face has become a big pop icon, has starred in movies and multiple talk shows. There has been only very few scientists who belived the face was made by aliens. NASA was very interested in the face so they started taking closer and closer looks. NASA used more powerful lenses which let you get a better look at it. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d407716fe4cd,EB3EBF4BB344,NASA finnaly figured out it was a natural land form. They even went back more than one time to check and everything still proved it was just a natural landform. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+3e06d18f5d69,EB3EBF4BB344,"What do you think, Is it an alien or is it a natural land form? Facts have proven that it is a natural land form. But all people will never agree if it is an ailen who made it or not. Hopefully this essay proves to you that this face is just a natural land form, but the world might never know. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+6353d1f70ea8,EB5021B098DD,I think that they should change to the elecetion by popular vote for the president of the united states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+6c377baaf7e5,EB5021B098DD,Then that would let people choose who wins. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+11a9fd905934,EB5021B098DD,"""Its official: the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational."" Electoral college voting is bad because it cant let the people choose who they want for president ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+0fd7384ebcf8,EB5021B098DD,"""Its hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abloish the electoral college!"". ""This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders. What gives?"". By Bradford plumer fam ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9f73953cf1e7,EB5021B098DD,"""Under the 23rd amendment of the consitution, the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college"" - the office of federal register. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+a5c243c5a5c1,EB5021B098DD,Those electors shouldn't be able to choose who runs for president. It should be the peoples choice. Congress should not be allowed to choose who runs for presidents.         ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+632ba969d59e,EB935594E696,Is better keep the Electoral College or change to election by popular vote for the president of the Unite States ? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c4a9500d4d38,EB935594E696,"Is better keep the electoral college because if you keep it they can vote for their president and also when they vote for their president at the same time they are voting for their candidate's electors. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+1198154c46b2,EB935594E696,"One reason why you have to keep the electoral college is beacuse they can vote for their president, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+474b234482c8,EB935594E696,"the presidental election is realized every four years after the first monday of November. When the presidental election is done the governor of each state has to prepare a Certificate of Arcertainment how the Federal Register says. Not only keep the electoral college allow to vote just for their president , they also when they are voting for their president they are voting for their electoral. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+eba9309dd116,EB935594E696,Moreover why you have to keep the electoral college is because when they vote for their president they are trusting on their electoral because if they vote for their president they are actually giving a vote to their electors. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d66e8a530047,EB935594E696,"The governor has to prepare the Certificate of Ascertainment.
+
+What the Certificate of Ascertainment do is that it declares the winning presindential of the state and it doesn't just declares who is  the winning presidential it additionaly shows you will electors are going to represent your state atr the meeting of the electors  in December of the election Year. Finally your state's Certificates of Ascertainment they are sent to the Congress of your country and the National archives it as part of the official  records of the presidential election. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+03f7645429ad,EB935594E696,It is true that if you change it by popular vote for the president many people is going to like it beacuse they just trust in the suposely best president ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+815cd9f2c36b,EB935594E696,"but if you keep the electoral college alot of people prefer vote for their president and at the same time they know they are voting for their electorals so they think is better beacuse maybe their electorals are pretty good like their presindent. 
+",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+d9fa717bfc65,EB935594E696,To conclude is better if you keep the electoral college because you are going to give us the opportunity to vote for our president and at the same time we belive in their electorals.      ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4be122d8d98f,EB9D8FFB4F45,"Hello Mr. senetor, my name is PROPER_NAME and i want to talk about some inportant stuff. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+d914efda5a6a,EB9D8FFB4F45,For on i want to keep the electoral Collage ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4e8d3ca54251,EB9D8FFB4F45,This is a syste that has been happeing since our founding fathers have been on earth. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b481e9b31c86,EB9D8FFB4F45,Its where they vote for the pesident and vice president of United States of America. Now you want to get ride of this great tradistion that we do. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+47764e54c6ed,EB9D8FFB4F45,I know sometimes we might get confused and vote for the wrog candidate. ,Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+cea204279ee0,EB9D8FFB4F45,But that is not all of us. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+92967598b39a,EB9D8FFB4F45,Everyone thinks its a disastor factor. The electoral collage will improve and will keep improving. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+ce4647b66c32,EB9D8FFB4F45,"In the text it says "" The electoral college is widely rgarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a priesedent that ought to be overuled By declaring the candidate who recives the most popular votes the winner . The advocates of this positionare correct in arguuing that the electorl collage method is not democrticin a modern sence. It is the electors who elect th president, not the people . When you vote fora pesidentian candidate youre actually voting for slate of electores."" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b63afeae91bc,EB9D8FFB4F45,Thats what the text said and we dont want that. Us the people want to vote for who we want to. This will be something big if we can keep this thing going.  ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+e216f6d88dee,EBD070DAE867,"As technology continues to advance, cars are seeing advancements in safety and driving capabilities that go further than what the driver can do. Cars the can sense when the car needs to break if the driver is distracted. Brakes that are anti-lock which means they distribute different amounts of braking pressure to wheels that may have more traction to prevent loss of control. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+bbffa7497599,EBD070DAE867,"All of these things are very good for cars and keeping drivers safe but are we close to seeing the ""Driverless Car""? ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+6ccf356b6473,EBD070DAE867,Cars have features now that can help or completely park themselves with the use of sensors. Many helpful gadgets that may help if human error occurs and can even prevent collisions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+763234d7ee9b,EBD070DAE867,But then you have to also consider if this technology were to fail or have glitches that could be very dangerous. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+230acbb277ee,EBD070DAE867,"We can not know how these ""smart cars"" will age and how we can update the technology in them.
+
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fc4dcc055c0f,EBD070DAE867,It is definitely possible to create a self-driving car. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+7ec50b78004b,EBD070DAE867,Many different organizations have succesfully done it but on closed tracks. These tracks do not have the real world complications that can arise such as road work or accidents that cause the car to go on alternate paths because the original one is blocked. This is when the human must take over and redirect the car. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+816c0f8e2f26,EBD070DAE867,"Although there is this talk of a car that can drive without a human, we have not seen a car that is reliable and safe enough to be trusted without the driver being ready to take over when needed. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+14a330dec380,EBD070DAE867,"If the driver has to sit at ready all the time then how is it a driverless car? As a driver, I know what I am capable of and I feel best when I am driving and I am in control. It would take a whole lot of trust for me to just turn my car on autopilot and let it take over considering there are many things that can happen while you are driving down the road. Many questions come up, such as, Will the car react in time? Will the technology even know to react? Will the car safely and controllably avoid whatever obsticle is thrown it's way. All these things change if the driver is sitting back not driving because the car apparently can do it all by itself.
+
+Eventually, in the future, it is very possible to see cars with an autopilot function or other self-driving techniques but we are a long way from cars driving without human help. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a9d8356b9de,EBD070DAE867,Laws in all but four states make it illegal to use a car that drives itself ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bbbb6f91d04e,EBD070DAE867,"because, ""lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers"" (Paragraph 9). So it is obvious that we have a ways to go from a legal standpoint until you will see cars driving themselves on these American roads. This set aside, the advancements in technology is doing wonderful things in the safety category. Cars can avoid collisions or alert drivers if they make mistakes like going over the center double yellow lines. This helps prevent the awful head on collision of two cars. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f007c1dd6097,EBD070DAE867,"In conclusion, we are not terribly far from cars driving themselves. It is more a safety and trust concern rather than the technology being there. Cars will drive themselves more and more but with the aid of the driver always being there and capable of taking over at any time. But does this make them self-driving if the driver must be present and paying attention at all times? Why not keep their attention by just letting the driver, you know, DRIVE? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+bfe47c883248,EBF9131A638F,Distance learning is a new learning method for students to attend classes from home by online or you can video conference. Schools have brought distance learning in their system for students can do their assignments from home. Many people think this is a great idea and some oppose to this learning method. The schools can see if they are on track or online to their classes but if they arn't in the online class they will be behind in their assignments. Is this new learning method a great way to learn? or does being in a class with a teacher more beneficial for the student? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+99d79d20cd06,EBF9131A638F,The main problem in distance learning is if students are really getting on the online class. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+543e8117aaea,EBF9131A638F,"Students who do get on are on task and on point. The students who get on the computer and get on the online class for a short period of time at home might be playing, or might not be concentrated, because he is at home and dosen't feel like doing it. Students who don't do their assignments they wait until they are at school because in school you arn't distracted like at home you are concentrated and ready to work. Is distance learning beneficial for students at home? for some students it might be but for many it isn't. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+10bd6e5d5802,EBF9131A638F,Is online learning at home beneficial for students? some students do think its beneficial and a really great idea ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c632d5ddbd4,EBF9131A638F,"Many people prefer learning in class with a teacher because they can ask questions if they don't get the question that is being asked. Students do some of their work but get off in a short period of time if they are at home, if they were at school the students would be on task and doing their assignments, unlike at home they would be off task. Many students prefer teachers teaching them so they can get more information of what they are being taught. Distance learning isn't capable of doing what you do in a classroom. Is distance learning really beneficial? ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7e4c8cdcefe4,EBF9131A638F,Is being taught in a classroom more beneficial for students? many students prefer being taught by a teacher than online. Students are more productive and they share their thoughts and explanations in that specific assignment than online classroom ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+10244377005b,EBF9131A638F,"All the students are in the same page and all gathering more information by writing notes and being concentrated in their tasks. Students are more interactive with each other and sharing thoughts and many techniques to get the answers by fellow classmates, also getting good grades. Classroom learning is beneficial for many students and teachers. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+411759fc8614,EBF9131A638F,"Students have their own way of learning, it doesn't matter if its distance learning nor in a classroom. It is how they feel how they enjoy learning ",Position,Ineffective,,,
+a8e73291bbe6,EBF9131A638F,"Students will say this is the best way for learning other no this is, it doesn't matter what you think is the best way to learn its how you enjoy learning something it is the best way for you. The students who prefer distance learning really do it at home and feel like they are learning mush more at than in a classroom. Students who enjoy learning in a classroom like being around peers and want knowledge from everyone around them. They are both beneficial for that specific student.      ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5d0874a3a55e,EC145DC83EBE,I think having popular votes would be better ,Position,Effective,,,
+91678b1d75b3,EC145DC83EBE,Electoral Colleges has selection of electors witch makings them vote for the President/Vice President. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+971803274c8a,EC145DC83EBE,because when it is Electoral Colleges voters vote not for president but for slate of electors and thats who picks the president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+3840507bb73a,EC145DC83EBE,Electoral College is unfair. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+05ce76cc9575,EC145DC83EBE,Electoral Colleges process consists the selection of the electors and has a meeting with the electors where they vote for the President and Vice president ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+964bcb3eaec8,EC145DC83EBE,with popular votes the citizens are voting for who they want to be their President and who they want to be their Vice President ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e020b7b3f836,EC145DC83EBE,but in Electoral College electors pick and vote for who they think would be the best President for instance if you lived in Texas and want to vote for John Kelly you would have to vote for slate 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kelly in Electoral College but in popular voting you could  vote for anyone you wanted to and not someone who pledged that person. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e7afb8eaf48b,EC145DC83EBE,"The third reason why popular voting would be better is because Electoral College was unfair, outdated, and irrational ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5199cd6c86b,EC145DC83EBE,is also a turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their states like them knowingtheir votes will have no effect witch makes them pay less attention to Electoral College voting. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+71c5674e825c,EC145DC83EBE,This is all the reason why the state senator should choose populae voting over Electoral College voting.     ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+be92d1ea7a2b,EC1D25B7A42E,"Students will benefit from having the option to attend classes from home. There are several schools that offer the choice to learn from home and students have been able to benefit from it. Allowing students to have a choice in their education offers relief from forcing them to learn a certain way that brings them discomfort. Some may believe that offering distance learning is an awful idea because it keeps students from society, and while that may be true the option offers a unique way of learning. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4c70445c9698,EC1D25B7A42E,Students should be able to attend classes from home ,Position,Effective,,,
+777c857ade82,EC1D25B7A42E,because it offers a comfortable environment for them to learn in ,Claim,Effective,,,
+02ac5c2f5fca,EC1D25B7A42E,it gives them another way to learn ,Claim,Effective,,,
+bf8c6c62f758,EC1D25B7A42E,it prepares them for a possible future. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+ee1292dd034b,EC1D25B7A42E,While learning students should feel comfortable in the environment they are in and doing it from home allows them freedom from other outside pressures ,Claim,Effective,,,
+b6a14925ff8c,EC1D25B7A42E,"Allowing students to attend classes from home removes stress from having to do assignments in a rush; however, there are certain programs that do have time limits for assignments, some give students a leeway to do them. For example, my cousin felt stress and discomfort at his school with the way he was learning, so my family moved him to online learning at home, and now he is in a better environment to succeed in his education. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5c649293bb4d,EC1D25B7A42E,"Some may believe that the way someone learns has nothing to do with their environment, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+2020d93d3f12,EC1D25B7A42E,"while it might be true, we can see how students can be affected by observing them. Furthermore, certain environments give prime examples of how comfort affects the way students receive knowledge. 
+",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+c87ab4c5d28a,EC1D25B7A42E,"In the world some people are not provided with many choices in how they want their life to be, so offering the option to students is a pleasant idea. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+fcb48fa7869e,EC1D25B7A42E,"Some children in other parts of the world do not get to have a choice in how they receive an education, so giving the option does matter. Each student perceives knowledge in a different way and because the world is changing with technology and the internet, attending classes at home by the way of online or video conferencing does not sound like such a horrific idea. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+04a4e8956cb0,EC1D25B7A42E,"There are people who do not like the idea of changing the way students learn because they are terrified of change, so offering the choice is a problem to many. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+a915e772a582,EC1D25B7A42E,Others have the belief that giving the choice to students on how they want to learn is an amazing idea because it allows them to have a say in how they want to go about their education. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+a97f4c56e6de,EC1D25B7A42E,One last benefit of allowing students to learn from home is that they will be prepared for the future if they decide to pursue a job or career that makes you work from home. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+d8dfd0c9bf08,EC1D25B7A42E,"While students are learning at home, they are also getting the experience of working at home and developing skills for the future. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+60879f2e68b8,EC1D25B7A42E,Although there are people who have the belief that working from home isn't actually a job because you aren't considered to be working, ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,
+e107c4225680,EC1D25B7A42E,here are plenty of examples of people who work at home and have made successful careers from being at home ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+c01c35f56e27,EC1D25B7A42E,"Plenty of people have made incredible careers from the experience of learning at home, so it is a possibility for those students who get the chance to learn at home. Students will have a chance to be prepared for a possible future if they so desire while getting a different learning experience from it all. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+28d789a6ecb0,EC1D25B7A42E,"In conclusion, students will benefit in different ways from being offered the option to attend classes at home. Schools are allowing students to have a say in their education which is what matters because choices are considered to be something important. Attending classes at home allows students to have an option in the way they receive knowledge because it could be a fun, unique, and new way of learning for them. While students will be in a pleasant environment, will be given a choice, and will be prepared for something in a near future. Furthermore, changing the way students learn will be a key part in the future when everything changes with time. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+fe7e09f847c4,EC36E0BE58D8,"I am righting to you today about about a very important topic, I am here to tell you that ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+f65175f78bb0,EC36E0BE58D8,I believe we should change from Electoral College to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9f7248bd6ebf,EC36E0BE58D8,"First reason, why we should change to election by popular vote is because Electoral College is very unfair to the the people running for presdient, and the people voting. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b936f0807497,EC36E0BE58D8,"Its unfair mostley because of the winner-take-all system in each state. This system is ridicolus because a lot of candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the ""swing"" states. I know a lot of crazy systems like this are making people not want to vote anymore, which is not good. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e6e90dd61db,EC36E0BE58D8,"Another great reason, why we should change from the Electoral College to election by popular vote is because of how out of date and irrational the Electoral College actually is. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+b20435ba00f6,EC36E0BE58D8,"Us the people of the United States don't even get to vote for our next president directly, you help choose your state's electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+09de7b244f5b,EC36E0BE58D8,"The last reason, why we should change over to election by popular vote is because of the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+5e3a9d32c577,EC36E0BE58D8,"The way the Electoral College handles ties is unprofessional to many, becasue all they do is throw the election to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. The single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+1a240e498b1c,EC36E0BE58D8,Me and many others would really enjoy if the Electoral College was changed to election by popular vote. The reason being is because of how the Electoral College is unfair and irrational. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+e7ae2bf75249,EC729FFD9332,"The President of the United States is currently determined by an electoral college. The electoral college process involves the public voting for their elector and not the main focus, the candidates. Through this, many of the states gain more power than they should, and the votes are set up as a ""Winner-takes-all"" system. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+4e8742368e94,EC729FFD9332,This unneccessary and inaccurate use of votes is outdated and needs to be shut down. ,Position,Effective,,,
+2d60ee21fd7b,EC729FFD9332,"In an instant, an electoral college voter could change his or her mind and go against his or her original political party. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ba84645394da,EC729FFD9332,"This is a completely unfair use of power because it reverses all of the votes that went to the elector and to all of the voters who were counting on the elector to properly represent their vote. The voters have no say in whether the elector will stay true to his or her party. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+735825deee09,EC729FFD9332,"The easiest way to prove that the electoral college must go, is to reveal the facts. In source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College it states ""over sixty percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now"". Multiple icons such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO have stated they would like to abolish the electoral college as well! ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b2244a8dfe53,EC729FFD9332,We now have the majority vote to put an end to the electoral college and the unfair system. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+d8ea5fcd78cf,EC729FFD9332,"""Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote,"" says source 2. A tie in the votes, which is very much possible since the total number of votes is 538, according to source 1, could then allow the fate of America to rest in the hands of the House of Representatives, a miniscule representation of the people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b608551dfe5,EC729FFD9332,"If the voting system were to be changed to the popular vote, the results would accurately display the winner that the majority of America chose. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+559d3f999d48,EC729FFD9332,"""It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational,"" says Bradford Plumer, and he couldn't be closer to the truth. The electoral college system does not represent the people of America accurately and is more likely to result in a tie compared to the popular vote. To conclude, source 3 says the electoral college is ""a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+931eb047689c,ECF63F6AB48E,"I do not think students should be required to perform community service. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+8cdd0c071a49,ECF63F6AB48E,Because students should only perform in any type of community service if they litter or damage any property. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+65cb43a2fdd3,ECF63F6AB48E,"This way it will teach the students that they shouldn't litter and that it is bad, and damages a lot of our property and if they do it they will have to pay for what they have done and suffer a big punishment. For example if someone throws a drink bottle on the ground it is there responsibility and they should clean it up. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6adf463c6d7a,ECF63F6AB48E,Many students think that littering is a fun thing to do. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+3efec9f818e7,ECF63F6AB48E,"Littering is a foul habit for a lot of people, most people don't realize how bad it damages our community and pollution. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2a2ad9185570,ECF63F6AB48E,Many elementary schools think that cleaning up litter is very important so they take the time to help our community when they haven't done anything. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f45de2ea898f,ECF63F6AB48E,"i think whoever litters should take the punishment of performing this type of action, and clean up our community. ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ba82406a0c32,ECF6C77511E0,"Some of my friends do community service for our town. Meanwhile, some of my other friends do not do community service, and think that it is a waste of their time. I think that community service is a wonderful thing to do. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+bfdc03309f16,ECF6C77511E0,I think that you should consider making community service mandatory for all students. ,Position,Effective,,,
+1086808543b2,ECF6C77511E0,"Community service, helps others in need, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+10d550d1fd61,ECF6C77511E0,teaches students responsibility ,Claim,Effective,,,
+58531f25f6da,ECF6C77511E0,"and gets them involved in what is happening around them. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+a95154cd86df,ECF6C77511E0,"First of all, community service helps others in need. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b6240de79a06,ECF6C77511E0,"By making community service mandatory, you will be helping the lives of many other people or the environment. Little things like picking up trash in the park, or walking a neighbors dog, would really help out the town and the people living in it. Small things can make a big difference. And if everyone has to do community service, our town will be making a big difference in our community. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2918dbf354a7,ECF6C77511E0,"Next, community service will teach students responsibility. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+8971538ce195,ECF6C77511E0,"Having to be somewhere to help someone every week or so, will teach them responsibility. Helping someone out will teach students how to be responsible, and how to manage their time wisely. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2773399a5f71,ECF6C77511E0,Some people said that it would be a waste of their time to do community service. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+802a889b4721,ECF6C77511E0,"When it is not a waste, and could also help them out. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2ec9e9a439d5,ECF6C77511E0,"For example, if a student likes playing at a park, but they do not do their part to help keep it clean, it can be closed. One person makes a big difference. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+2f68d8d7a30a,ECF6C77511E0,"Lastly, it helps students get involved in what around them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+face7b8459e2,ECF6C77511E0,"Community service will help students to know what is going on in their town. By helping out a less fortunate family will let a student know that there are people in town that need help. And that there are little things that we can do to help them. Also, if a student is tutoring a child, they will learn that there are kids that may need a little more help then he or she might need. And that tutoring them can help make a very big difference. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4c12593946a9,ECF6C77511E0,"In conclusion, I think you should make all students do community service for our town. It will help many others in our town that need help. It will help teach students responsibility. Also, it will get students involved in what is happening around them. Therefore I think that you should make community service mandatory for all students in our school. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+9ff963f9c663,ECFAD2825EC6,"The Electoral College was established in the Constitution by the founding fathers. ""The Electoral College process consists of the selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress"" is stated in source 1. This is process has been around for decades, but things have changed. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+7501c21e66b7,ECFAD2825EC6,This process does not fit with what is happening in the present and is outdated. The election should be by popular vote. ,Position,Effective,,,
+9f308adc275a,ECFAD2825EC6,"There is a disaster factor.  According to ""Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"", it's says that the state legislatures are responsible for picking electors. The thing is that those electors can betray the trust which has happened before. You do not want to risk having someone defy the will of the people. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6feb44b681d2,ECFAD2825EC6,Some people may argue that the states know what they are doing and are cautious on who to pick ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+5830ee64bd09,ECFAD2825EC6,but in the past the electors have refused to vote for their party's candidate. You do not want to put this in hands of someone who will not help you and the other people on such an important event like voting. ,Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+38c3325c7d2c,ECFAD2825EC6,"When you vote, there is a slight possibility of a tie occuring. If this were to happen, the state delegations would vote on which president. Each state will cast one vote, which is not fair because of the amount of representives in different states. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+cd831fcd84f4,ECFAD2825EC6,"""...the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters"" is stated in source 2 ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+b332fa8ef71c,ECFAD2825EC6,Some people may say that the bigger states are helpful with voting because the Electoral College will balance out what the large states loss by the population votes. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5c58dc4a6b0f,ECFAD2825EC6,This still isn't fair because this is saying that the smaller states with less representatives do not have much say in the voting and this will turn off potential voters. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+2cde2db33be6,ECFAD2825EC6,"Some presidents may have a stronger appeal to some states then others. It may have to do with where the president is from (North, South). This goes back to how the bigger states have more power. ""...such as Romney was in the South, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states,"" is stated in source 3. This means that the bigger states in the South will be known for all voting Romney since that is where he is the strongest and well liked. There may be voters in the South that were more for Obama. Smaller states may hate what Romney is doing and vote for Obama, but they do not have as much power as the bigger states. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+c66e62637603,ECFAD2825EC6,"This is like the winner takes it all, they may know that they have no chance in winning. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+2d849c73f937,ECFAD2825EC6,"(Obama did end up winning and was titled as the 44th President of the United States. To others, they may say that each persons vote does count but it doesn't seem like it. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+0f6f4a005418,ECFAD2825EC6,The voters in the South didn't see any campaign ad by Romney which was not fair because he was not concerned about them not voting for him. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a1994afc8a73,ECFAD2825EC6,"The Electoral College is not a fair process. It worked in the past, but not anymore. Using the popular vote process is more fair for all of the people. They have more say and there votes feel more important. This will encourage potential voters to vote and to become more involved with the political events. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+d223ba099726,ECFCAAECAD31,I favoring of keeping the Electoral College ,Position,Adequate,,,
+380740ac3413,ECFCAAECAD31,it aviods run-off elections ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c17c183f18fd,ECFCAAECAD31,certainy of outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0c3bb17a5e10,ECFCAAECAD31,"then no canidate can get the most votes in a vote cast. According to the article “Does the Electoral College work ”source three states, “Nixon in 1968 and cliton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurity or the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College(301 and 307 electoral votes respectively ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4ad697b25d10,ECFCAAECAD31,The electoral college is important because it can do certainty of the outcome ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+f7988f9c9e1c,ECFCAAECAD31,"It's important that it has it so that it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. According to the article “Does the Electoral College work”source three states,“In the 2012 election,for example Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the elcetoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and romney ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5c42126b54c5,ECFCAAECAD31,I also what to keep the Electoral College so that nothing goes wrong if it gets changed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a103c23ffeba,ECFCAAECAD31,"For example, if one thing in the electoral college is gone, then the whole thing may be affected by it. Also if theres no Electoral College then they wouldn't be any electors to select from and no counting of the electoral votes by congress. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0d0ac2c02c78,ECFCAAECAD31,"In conclusion to,I favor in keeping the Electoral College instead of changing it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+689beb7b3668,ED1EFE97C40F,"Some students have a hard time getting to school. Whether it be sickness, not having a ride to school, or even a family emergency, getting to school can be difficult sometimes and often students will suffer consequences if they arent able to show up to school, especially since only a certain number of those absences can be marked as excused. Teachers may also have difficulty getting to school, or its simpy better for them to work from home and aviod the irritation of some students,Something that would be able to solve this issue is if classes were able to be online. Even though most of the class work is already online, some students grades are going down even if they do the work from home, and most of the time its because attendance is a portion of the grade ",Lead,Effective,,,
+14560c74ed38,ED1EFE97C40F,"I strongly agree that online classes would be beneficial to students, and education in general ",Position,Adequate,,,
+7ccfd144d270,ED1EFE97C40F,"because it makes it easier to participate in classes, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+187db3c49280,ED1EFE97C40F,"students are able to still attend class if they are missing school, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+9496bf09df1f,ED1EFE97C40F,"and finally if the school has to cancel due to weather or illness related issues, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+49141381cdfd,ED1EFE97C40F,"students are still able to meet with the teacher and get their work done, and get help if needed. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+92f9bdd2b44b,ED1EFE97C40F,One of the many reasons online school would be beneficial is because it makes it easier for students who might have social issues and have a hard time participating in class activities ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7b02df5b2d01,ED1EFE97C40F,"I have a friend named Generic_Name who has really bad anxiety and often misses a lot of school because shes afraid of having to present in class, or deal with other students face to face. Specifically in her history class, where her teacher assigns lots of group projects, or work that needs to be presented, its really challenging for her to focus, If her class were to be an online course, it would eliminate the fear of presenting in front of her class, because she could have a private session with the teacher, and possibly present it that way, or with a smaller group of students that shes comfortable with. Now some people could disagree, and say Generic_Name needs to get over her fear,and education is more important, but having the option for an online class would help her relax, and focus more on her school work rather than her personal fears. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+79f3f1985ba3,ED1EFE97C40F,Another reason it would be beneficial is if a student misses a class. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+5dfbf5729af8,ED1EFE97C40F,"My friend Generic_Name was sick not that long ago with the flu, and missed all of her classes for a week straight. Even though she did her work, her grade and attendance suffered because she wasnt able to show up to class, and most of the absences were unexcused. If classes were online, she would be able to log on, and get her attendance points, and her points from the curriculum. People could disagree and say that students would get lazy, and not long onto the program to do their work, however those students would still have to face the consequences of a lower grade and possible detention,or a mark off for not signing into the programs. Its really the same as a regular class, it just offers the comfort of home, and personal resources and still gives students the opportunity to get the help they need. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+2c53806d321a,ED1EFE97C40F,The last example is if schools had to shut down due to weather or other issues. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7f99224d97cb,ED1EFE97C40F,"School districts only have a certain amount of school days they can miss before they have to start cutting into summer vacation, which is unfair for both students and teachers. Due to current events, the Corona Virus is making lots of parents and students paranoid, and while my school personally has around 15 days of off time since we didnt get any snow this year, that would either be 15 days of missed schooling entirely, or if we end up surpassing those days, the school year extends to meet the days required to be in school. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+28dfd0cfe6fa,ED1EFE97C40F,"If most classes were able to be taken online, teachers would still be able to teach the required lessons and students would be able to learn, and still have time to ask the teacher for help or advice. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+7cc869557443,ED1EFE97C40F,"An issue that rises up with that is some classes or lessons wouldnt be able to be taught online like experiments in a science class or a class like Physical education, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+ac170c3deb1c,ED1EFE97C40F,"but those can easily be made up, and if need be, those classes can remain physical if thats what the school board needs, or what the students need to meet the graduation requirements. Again, its not that much different than regular schooling. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+6caae2f18703,ED1EFE97C40F,"In Conclusion, The idea of having online or at home schooling would be very beneficial to students and teachers as well. It offers the security that the student will still be able to do what they need to get done and gives the student a sense of responsibility by taking charge of their own education. While it may be challenging to turn some classes into an online course, it ultimately helps the school and even the students in times of need by being a security blanket in case something happens. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+b265bf5b7ab4,ED321E901AC7,The system of the Electoral College is a widely argued debate as to if it should be continued or if it should be gotten rid of. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+c46dc86b48bd,ED321E901AC7,"The electoral system shouldn't be used as a system of voting, who honestly wants to vote for someone who will vote for you, and if we are truly a state thats votes for its own president then why doesn't the popular vote count as the offical vote? ",Position,Effective,,,
+3874d578f243,ED321E901AC7,"The Electoral College is a system that is rather unfit as a system of the people's voting. When you vote for your president, you're really just voting for who you think should vote for them. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+9b2305e00bb7,ED321E901AC7,"The article ""Does the Electoral College Work?"" states, ""...when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for you candidate's electors."" The Constitution states that we are able to vote for our president, but then what do you call this? This is not an example of what America stands for, and this is certainly not the voting system that is described by our nation's properties. There is another issue with this violation of rights concerning our voting system, it's how the Electoral College votes and how dependable they are. The article ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong."" talks about how you can't control who the electorals you chose vote for. ""Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always."" This statement helps prove that the president you may want may not even get you vote. The Electoral College not only takes away your right to assuringly vote for the president of your choice, but it also takes away right personal voting right as an American. Don't let someone else detain your freedom of speech, let you personal voice be heard by the people. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8e13412f162d,ED321E901AC7,"While the Electoral College may seem like a sure fire way to assure that we get a president, that doesn't really mean the majority wants that president. Think about it, we don't always get the president we voted for. Popular vote doesn't really matter, it's like saying you voice doesn't matter to the government. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+1a1d66d801bb,ED321E901AC7,"They took away the right as an American they gave you in the first place. Popular vote should replace the Electoral College. There have been instances where the popular vote reined supreme, but the Electoral College didn't agree. In the article, ""The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong"" it mentions an election where Al Gore lost even though he won the popular vote. ""...according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency..."" This helps show the people that it seems our vote isn't what is truly important, it's only what the Electoral College does that makes a true impact on choosing of president for the next two years. It's even stated in the very same article that, ""...over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now."" If our vote truly matters then why not vote on keeping the Electoral College in play or getting rid of the flawed system once and for all. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+68f32d37b357,ED321E901AC7,"The Electoral college is claimed to keep the voting system in line and prevent major mess, however this is not truly the case. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+5859056a3cbb,ED321E901AC7,"There will still be flaws, but this is not the correct way to fix it. Listening strictly to the people's vote is what Amercia was built on and as an American I would like to see a change and let my voice be heard. If I want to vote I will vote, I don't want to vote on someone voting for me. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+140932d60cd2,ED321E901AC7,"The Electoral College is unfair, unjust, and unamerican. The system takes away our right to vote for who we want not who we want to vote for us. If you are a true American you will understand why I know this is flawed. The Electoral College is not a proper way to handle our votes it must be a vote decided completely by the people of Amercia.    ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+e15a4eed694a,ED42630A9FFF,One reason why you should know it was not created from aliens but is a natural landform ,Position,Adequate,,,
+483ae1b690e4,ED42630A9FFF,is because they didnt have good cameras back then. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4b9a3622e327,ED42630A9FFF,An example is the first picrure they took was kind of blury and it was too far away so you couldn't really see anything. this example show that if it were clearer maybe we would have know along time ago. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f825d210ab65,ED42630A9FFF,"Another example is Moc team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orginal Viking photo. This example shows that by cameras upgrading , we could see more closly and more clearer. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0046de93a962,ED42630A9FFF,My last and finale example the second picrure they took wasnt that blury but wasnt clear and was not too far but not close enough. This finale example shows how during this photo cameras where not at there best but not at there worst they were in the middle. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d60cf0f94fdc,ED42630A9FFF,These example show how cameras effected the photo.        ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+ab8e3381220f,ED62619C520F,"I have to disagree, I do not like this idea. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+37f62c07cdb8,ED62619C520F,"For some people a ""B"" average is very hard to get to. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f3a5cb5acb16,ED62619C520F,"School, is getting harder, I understand where your coming from. A ""B"" average for some people, they just can't do it. The work is hard for all athletes to get ""A"" and ""B"" averages. To juggle sports and practices, then getting good grades. That's really hard. If you can do all of that, and get an ""A"" or a ""B"" average that person should be very proud of themselves. You have to go to practice then after that you do homework. Some people just can't juggle all of that. It takes time to get that all settled out. It's hard to get use to. Your tired most of the time when you play sports. You go from School, to practice, then you get home late and you are wore out. You don't have time to do your homework. You get wore out, you have to do a lot when you play sports. That's why some people don't play. They want to keep there grades up. If they played a sport it would be harder for them to study. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+68abefdf6c7b,ED62619C520F,"I understand you want us students, to have very good grades ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+384cc530a1e1,ED62619C520F,You can't expect that from every single student. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+8e2571f62590,ED62619C520F,"That's hard for some people. I mean some athletes can do it. Most athletes are included in a lot of extra curricular activities at school. They have clubs, and sports, and most of them keep there grades up. It just depends on how much stress you can take. Playing sports, is really stressful, when you have homework, and clubs. You get tired and worn out when you do a lot. You just have to suck it up and deal with it, it's a part of being a real athlete. Some people aren't cut out to be a athlete. It's a lot of work, if you want to be good. Some kids play all sports, that come in a regular season. It's hard, but they do it. Some people don't understand all the stuff athletes have to deal with and go through, its hard work. If you do it you are apart of the team and you can't quit. Most great athletes at school have a ""B"" average. If you don't have great athletes, you don't have a good team. I'm all for it if your failing two or more classes you can't play, but just a ""C"" average. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f301fe5e1b9b,ED62619C520F,I don't like that. I know it's not my call of how you do things. All of that was just my opinion. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+42ccfb92d0ca,ED6B6A38F98D,The electoral college  system should be kept because it was established in the Constitution. It plays a big role in voting. But also should not be kept because voters vote not for president but for slate of electors. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+d732cfc493a9,ED6B6A38F98D,And also can confuse voters about the candidate and end up voting wrong. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a49a9f46f631,ED6B6A38F98D,The electoral college system sholud be kept if it help  the people ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+c55c6e9e4688,ED6B6A38F98D,"the votes of the electors so they can total up the scores of the votes. And it  consists of 538 electors but only majority of electoral of 270 is requried to elect the president.
+
+An election is told to be held every four year after the first monday in November. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+b1b1b7f2d743,ED6B6A38F98D,Electoral college system sholud not be kept because its really not a vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+be346c8f8653,ED6B6A38F98D,When u go to vote your really not voting for that person you votin for that person slate of electors. So if your not voting for them y vote at all it would make no sense to. These is one reason why it should not be kept. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+7f90794f411f,ED6B6A38F98D,say (Bradford Plumer) and sometimes people wonder what would might cause the disaster factor We sholud consider our selves lucky  that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest electon crisis in a century  sya (Bradford Plumer). ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+586536b65ba5,ED6B6A38F98D,The electoral college should be kept because it cause less stress on big states than it will on small states. And it helps advoid run off electoral ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+635adeb17bf7,ED6B6A38F98D,to where not just one candidate get all votes  like nixon and clinton because both only had 43% of plurality majority in the Electoral College. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+912fcc18c961,ED6B6A38F98D,These are some reasons why electoral college should and shouldn't be kept and should be changed.      ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+5f157eecf0ae,ED8EE1F02203,"A electors  college is a process , not a place. The electoral college was established it is the constitution as a conpromise betweet election of the presendent by a vote in congress and electection of the presendent by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The election college it like what person you want to br the presendent , maybe you dont vote for that person maybe someone will vote for them. youcan votefor anyboby only if you think that person is good for the comminuty. ",Lead,Ineffective,,,
+425f05a3e640,ED8EE1F02203,You help choose your state electors when you vote for presendent because when you vote for your condidute you are actully voting for your condidate's electors. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+187236f2c219,ED8EE1F02203,In the story they ask you what is wrong with the electors college. I think the problem is that one the off-change that those electors be anyone not holding public office. ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+0363366b5340,ED8EE1F02203,"The single best argument agaisnst the electorsal college is what they might call the disaster factor. they the people in american should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. is the most worrying  the prospect of s tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrwn to the house of representatives, where state delegation vote on the presendent. And the thing is that the senate would choose the vice-presendent. because each state cast only one vote, the single representative from wyoming, representing 5000,000 votes would have sa much say as the 55 representative from carofornia, who represent 35 million votes.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+eef3312cdf97,EDC00F1B2823,The thought of driverless cars is amazing. Are there more dangers than what we think? ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+523f03e376d3,EDC00F1B2823,If the car is supposed to alert the drive what happens if it fails to do so in enough time to stop the crash? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+167152ba1d62,EDC00F1B2823,If it is driverless your kids could start the car and leave they wouldnt need to even touch the wheel. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5085e0fc513,EDC00F1B2823,"Driverless cars are a great idea but the dangers and other factors have not been depated yet. 
+",Position,Adequate,,,
+6e7992260fd5,EDC00F1B2823,"Just think it drives itself, your daughter wants to go somewhere and you wont take her. She could turn the car on and set a destination anywhere and the car would take her there. You lost your car to an eight year old who couldnt reach the pedals. Now if the car had to be driven by a person she wouldnt have been able to leave. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+a50a44e7cb87,EDC00F1B2823,if your sick and dizzy and you need to go to the hospital your car could take you there. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13ed04e8c7d4,EDC00F1B2823,If someone is injured and you have to help them while the car is moving thats another advantage. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ffc11feb39ea,EDC00F1B2823,"Your on a trip to california from indiana and your afraid to fly so you drive with the new driverless car. You get bored because you dont have to do anything,and your getting tired. So you fall asleep in the car; up ahead there is a broken bridge and your car couldnt wake you up and you missed the detour because your car was incapable of doing its job. Fortunatly your car has a sensor to that aplies the brakes when the driver does not wake up and take the wheel. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4423bbd5808e,EDC00F1B2823,"
+A teenager who DOES NOT know how to drive is supposed to steal a car for a gang as an initiation. He knows what the new driverless car looks like. Its the new car you just bout for 30 Thousand dollors. He brakes into the car and turns it on and sets the destination for the gangs warehouse. It drives itself there. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+ac7c6dd6853f,EDC00F1B2823,He wouldnt have gotten the car there if it didnt drive itself. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e371173b38a7,EDC00F1B2823,What if the car doesnt stop at the lights and it causes an accident? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+019cb0a780b9,EDC00F1B2823,Three people are injured two end up dieing. It could have been prevented if the driver of the driverless car was paying attention to the road. With the driverless car how many people do you really think will still pay attention to the road. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+87d593c7e913,EDC00F1B2823,"This is a waste of taxe and government money. If we are going to use our money on something it should be to make gas cheaper, help veterans who are homeless, the wounded warriors who give us the freedom to spend money. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+640f4892a43c,EDC00F1B2823,Driverless cars yes will change the world but i doubt it is for the better. ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+5ffe09846fe2,EDC00F1B2823,Kids wont need to have drivers lisence if the car drives itself. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+cf7dacd3f631,EDE56797770A,"I think that people shouldn't have to do community service unless they get into legal trouble such as a fight, and they are charged with assault. Or if someone steals something and they are charged with stealing. ",Position,Effective,,,
+6df0e0821f9c,EDE56797770A,I think that as long as someone does what he is supposed to do then it is okay that they don't have to do community service. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+af88d58b9191,EDE56797770A,"how would you feel if someone just put a task in front of you without your permission, when you could be studying, or exercising to prevent not being fat like this country is now, and not being dumb like most of the country is. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+47263b8be8b4,EDE56797770A,"we should really be doing things that can help ourselves and do community service whenever we want. Because if you force someone to do something, we wont like it. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b5c4689f3a61,EDE56797770A,if you make people do community service nobody will do it. We will just say we did it even though we didn't. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9cae3c57cd0f,EDE56797770A,"tree huggers, AKA environmentalists
+
+Anyway they are obsessed with the earth but what they don't get is that big companies are starting to fund research to find greener ways to help the environment so that we can run on electricity. We shouldn't do it because we are kids and we don't have to go and pick up trash in the middle of the road where cars are coming and trucks can hit us. And the government is already slowly demolishing our freedoms to save the little fishies that swim in gutters. They live on algae and stuff so why ban phosphates in dishwasher detergent, or get rid of mercury in light bulbs and have the green light bulbs which shine too bright or too dull. So the government really shouldn't take our rights away. So i say if they are doing something about it we shouldn't have to worry about it. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0f36f0d80004,EDE56797770A,"Elementary kids can learn by their teachers. Why in the heck do kids that learn how to spell need tutoring? Their teacher should teach them, or their guardians or whoever the heck they live with tutor them, why don't they help the kids and not us, when sometimes we mess up on the stuff too ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d4b43c5dcda7,EDE56797770A,Why cant we go do something with our lives because we make our lives. We don't need anyone else to control them. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c312dcf18b19,EDE56797770A,"So don't force us to do something we don't want to do, or buy something we don't want to buy, or force us to not buy something so we eat with dirty dishes. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+312883867b03,EDE56797770A,if you make us do community service we will not do good in school because we are too tired to do anything. If you put in a sleep time that would be nice though. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+572ca0c25ab5,EDE56797770A,"I remember in pre-k no-one wanted to sleep, and now i want to sleep every period and I'm in 8th grade. So seriously, please switch that around. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+9f429d0730c5,EDEB83CB57BB,"I think that driverless cars are a good idea in theory, but in practice they seem impracticle, costly, and unsafe. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+4026a5317acc,EDEB83CB57BB,Smart cars require quite alot of preperation for something that is so underwelming. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+fd5769026673,EDEB83CB57BB,Same thing goes for investing money into cars that are incredibly slow and dumb when compared to us. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+e9b8a5b25db0,EDEB83CB57BB,"Lastly, smart cars aren't guranteed to not crash or accidently run off a bridge because it couldn't see that the bridge had been demolished later that day. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f954cc0d360d,EDEB83CB57BB,"Smart cars may be smart, but that doesn't make them better. Smart cars have to guess and assume what will happen based on what they were told by their programming. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+96fec3eac7f4,EDEB83CB57BB,"Smart cars rely a whole lot on electronics, so they could be in theory hacked or misinformed sending it into the wall of the house to it's left because it was told that everything was considered road and not impassable terrain. ""Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheal, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirrow, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+c9b4c73bed73,EDEB83CB57BB,Even though driverless cars are possible doesn't make it cheap. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+cd6d708382cb,EDEB83CB57BB,"It's possible to build a skyscraper out of gold, but it would probably require more then all the money on earth to afford it. Even if you could build this golden skysraper, what would happen after that? Gold is a rather soft material so it would most likely weather away as time wore on and would eventually collapse, even if it wasn't destroyed what would you do with a golden skyscraper that you couldn't do with a normal one? ""Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at a Radio Shack"" ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+c3428450407a,EDEB83CB57BB,"Finally we get to the main issue with self driven cars, are they safe ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ed158ddf9150,EDEB83CB57BB,"Nothing is less safe then a machine that can act on its own, it doesn't require any input from the driver to accelerate or make a turn. Even with all the safety restraints in the world, these cars would still manage to injure or kill people. Artificial Intelligence isn't the same thing as a machine that can act on its own, AI actually thinks about what will happen if they do this or that, machines just do what their told. ""Presently, traffic laws are written wih the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times."" ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+51711d8bb49f,EE2FC4219F49,"I am writing this lettter to talk about how the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. ",Position,Effective,,,
+a406e69c1549,EE2FC4219F49,"First, the Electoral College is unfair to voters ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b318a4e3b80e,EE2FC4219F49,"Second, there could be a tie in the electoral vote. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+b5e255cce78a,EE2FC4219F49,"Last, the voters are merely voting for the slate of electors rather than the president. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+aa62e962f3d6,EE2FC4219F49,To start this off the Electoral College is unfair to the voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0d9d29cc7777,EE2FC4219F49,"Because of the ""winner-take-all system in each state"", the candidates don't take time to go to other states that they know they will lose, they only really focus on the ""swing"" states. For example, during the 2000 campaign, seventeen statesdidn't see the candidates in their state at all, also 25 of the largest media markets had not seen a single campaign ad from a candidate. Also it's unfair because voters don't really know who to vote for because they see no campaign ads and candidates don't show up to their state and tell them what he/she is running for. That's why the Electoral College is unfair to voters of the presidential election. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+43848fd5dfb3,EE2FC4219F49,"Second, there could be a tie in the electoral vote. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+85d8a4d67eef,EE2FC4219F49,"In the case of the tie it would go straight to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote for the president. By this the House's decision is no where close to that of the people in their state. The election is omly a few swing voters away from catastrophe. That's why it is bad if the vote ends in a tie. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+e3465394c992,EE2FC4219F49,"Lastly, the voters are merely voting for the slate of electors rather than the president. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+ebe1a07de43f,EE2FC4219F49,"For instance, if you ""lived in Texas and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry."" The worst part is that the electors could be anyone you don't even have to hold a political position to be an elector, they could be very biased and narrowminded. That's why the Electoral College is unfair. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d1c4705ba1dd,EE2FC4219F49,"In conclusion Mr. Senator the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational because it is unfair to voters, there could be a tie in the electoral vote and the voters are merely voting for a slate of electors and not there president. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+119aca478c56,EE6DDAF8FD20,"I would go with policy 1, because there are many reasons why students would have their cell phones with them. ",Position,Adequate,,,
+68577f38ee9b,EE6DDAF8FD20,"There could have been something bad in your family and one of your parents might call to notify you what has happened, there's some kind of murderer in the school and the phones are out and cell phones are the only device to contact someone when you really need help, or you are on school grounds in a severe condition and there is no one else there to help you, you could either call for help or use your cell phone. I kind of support the use of cell phones even though I don't own one, I might ask for someone to use their's when I need to make a call. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+17308f35e6f9,EE6DDAF8FD20,"Even though these events are rare, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+35374230e77a,EE6DDAF8FD20,you might not know what will happen. ,Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+2e04ebd95841,EE6DDAF8FD20,"In my opinion, I would tell the principle to use policy 1. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+347418b9227f,EE6DDAF8FD20,"If I asked all the students who have cell phones with them if they want policy 1, there would be a chance that most of them would say yes. If I asked teachers with cell phones, probably most of them would want policy 2. I have already wrote a letter to the principle before this for an assignment if students should be allowed to have cell phones, either for educational use, emergency, or at certain time periods. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5a190567676b,EE6DDAF8FD20,"Students want their cell phones with them just to be equal to their teacher, even though we are already equal by having an education and what events the school hosts for us to join. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+23bd073a7297,EEC4B41664DF,"Driverless cars are the future of driving. It is an inevitable fact, people are already spending countless hours trying to figure out how to make cars safe and driverless, and have made some cars that are nearly driverless. ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+9a57e9a17314,EEC4B41664DF,I think that driverless cars are a bad idea. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+0fd96dddc89a,EEC4B41664DF,These cars will just help fuel americas lazy lifestyle. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+2539556065b8,EEC4B41664DF,Having cars the drive themselves will take all of the fun out of driving. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+f367cd3360ca,EEC4B41664DF,I think that driving is a lot of fun and if we take away peoples ability to drive then we will miss out on a lot of fun and skills that can help in everyday life. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50318146acb5,EEC4B41664DF,"Automatic cars are not safe, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+22a1657e727e,EEC4B41664DF,if there is an accident on the road or constuction or anything blocking the road then the automatic cars will need the assistance of human drivers. The cars that are being produced now are not even fully automatic. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e8a6be99d90,EEC4B41664DF,"There are some car manufactoring companies that have already made cars that are almost driverless and have been working on making driverless cars for years and years. Some of these companies include General Motors, google (using a Toyota Prius), BMW, Tesla, Mercedes Benz, Audi, and Nissan have all either come out with a car that is almost driverless or has released plans to release them, Tesla in 2016 and the others in 2020. These manufacturing companies have already started making automatic cars and have been working on them for a very long time. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+128b37b2fa9a,EEC4B41664DF,I think that if the companies keep working and progressing on the safety issues with the automatic vehicles then maybe these automatic cars can be a good thing. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+c63bb4e925eb,EEC4B41664DF,"The American lifestyle, some might say that it is hardworking and free, others howeveer might say that we are lazy. I have to agree with both, we have many citizens that are very hardworking and strive to do their best and improve themselves and others. Sadly that is not all of out citizens, we have a gigantic amount of people in our contry that are lazy, they do not want to work for anything, and expect everything in life to be given to them without them putting forth any more effors than applying for some things online. If the automobile manufactorers release a car that drives itself, that will just be one more thing that the lazy americans do not have to do. It would be another thing just handed to them that they would not have to work for. These cars are made by the hardworking to make life for the lazy easier. I do not think that this is something that needs to happen or something that should even be considered. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a820d6d9d1a8,EEC4B41664DF,"When I get in my car and just drive, it is always fun. The feeling of being free and being able to go wherever you want and just to be able to drive is amazing. I think that many people love to drive and if we made automatic cars the manual cars would start to dissappear. Making many people upset and many others miss out of the wonders of driving. Diving a car can help build and develop many skills that can be helpful in every day life and even at work. Driving can help you develop your reflexes and your ability to spot details and be somewhat predictive of what others might do. That can help with plenty of jobs including sports. Learning to drive a car is one of the memories that you will remeber forever. If we have automatic cars then we will miss out on those memories. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d398cdbbdfee,EEC4B41664DF,"These automatic cars can not handle anything besides normal road conditions or even pulling in and out of driveways. ""They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents"" (Driverless cars are coming, author unknown). These cars have been built to alert the driver when they need to take over the vehicle, but are still not capable of functioning without a human driver, which could be a safety hazards. If the vehicle is not able to handle the road conditions ahead it will attemp to notify the driver inside, but considering it is an automatic vehicle the driver may have fallen asleep due to the lack of entertainment of activities to keep them alert and then the car nor the driver is able to manuver the obsticles ahead and the could cause an accident resluting in the death of anyone involved. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+a5a6179248f5,EEC4B41664DF,"Driverless cars are coming, and they are going to be dangerous. Driverless cars are coming and they stilll have a lot of issues to work through that could be dangerous. Driverless cars are going to reward the lazy for being lazy, and make them have to do even less work. Taking away the need for human drivers in vehicles will take away great memories, fun adventures, and many valuable skills that peple can gain while driving a car. These cars also can cause many safety issues including accidents from the lack od the cars ability to handle certain situations and could also cause issues if the drivers of these cars fall alseep when there is a sitiuation where there is a need for a human driver. RIght now these cars do not have enough safety features and they do not have enough driving capability to be safe for public use. If the manufactoring companies continue to work on these cars and make improvements, then these cars might not be completely bad, but as of right now they are not safe enough or skillled enought to be sent out to the pubic. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+5b44a5058a12,EED4EEF4523A,"there is a huge concern over who's vote is the real vote, Americas, or the Electoral College ""Your vote counts"" is what the citizens of America always hear when it is finally time to vote. But does it really count the way that it should? The tuesday after the first monday in November, everyone is going crazy lining up outside of the voting polls and waiting to make their vote count for who they want their new president to be. But are they really voting for a President or a state of electors? ",Lead,Effective,,,
+6ecf6bb9c141,EED4EEF4523A,Whats the point of even putting in our vote if the Electoral College is gonna take over and vote for who they want. It makes no sense at all. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+9996337d5d02,EED4EEF4523A,It is completely understood that they use the peoples votes  for who they pledged on but that really has no purpose. Instead of having the people of America vote then why don't we just have the Electoral College be the only people to vote? ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+991ca9435354,EED4EEF4523A,So basically when the people of America go and vote they are not voting for any president at all. Instead they are voting for Democratic and Republican electors. That completely overrides the whole purpose for the Presidential election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+328c0630dbe6,EED4EEF4523A,"In 2002, Al Gore lost the election due to the Electoral College. He had more individual votes but George Bush had more electoral votes. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+72764ea5b75a,EED4EEF4523A,That proves that many peoples vote doesnt count. If more people voted for Gore thats what the people of America wanted and there was proof. So it was very unfair how Bush won because of electoral votes. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+499dfcfea6bc,EED4EEF4523A,The only real reason that the people are to vote is to be played. America is being fooled by thinking that their vote does something when really it does nothing at all. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+07d945e72f76,EED4EEF4523A,"If Bush won because of the Electoral College and not individual votes why did the people even vote?  If noone were to vote then we would still have a president because, the Electoral College would just vote for who they wanted instead right? So why must America vote? ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+e38149268d35,EED4EEF4523A,"If our votes count then why would we need an Electoral College to assist in the presidential election? America should be able to get who they want not who the Electoral College wants. So the question usually asked should not be, ""Did you vote"" but instead, ""Did the Electoral College vote""? ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+cffd566bcd58,EF0D75BF48DA,I favor in to changing election by popular vote ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e4de39b1219f,EF0D75BF48DA,because it would be more fair to the people who are running ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9bbaf880b267,EF0D75BF48DA,and it would be quicker to decide who is president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+ec16364839c0,EF0D75BF48DA,I think its better to be elected by popular votes because people actually like the person for a reason and actually listening to what that person is saying and actually agrees what he saying and they see something in that person instead of just having congress vote count mostly instead of the citizens. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+4e76fc3696b9,EF0D75BF48DA,And its not really fair that a person wins just because of his or hers own group of electors gets him to win it should just be based on popularity ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+385bec763e8d,EF0D75BF48DA,because its fair as i said before for example what if their was some person running for president and he was not really good to run the United States and yeah some people voted for him but he wasnt as popular but he won the election because of his group itb wouldnt really be fair because  the people perferd the other guy better in office. Why because ethier people liked what he had for the states n what he would offer to the people and actually help us live good and thats what is important for the state its all about the people wants because thats how we will live right. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+289b20a47e4a,EF0D75BF48DA,Also the person running for office might not have any electorial votes because theie campaigning wasnt heavy in a certain part of the state so they would oviously vote for the other person because they really havent seen what that person has to offer to them and he will have less succes in winning the election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+3bda10637b4a,EF0D75BF48DA,It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a canidate ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c01977716bfe,EF0D75BF48DA,witch means that they can relie on  their state as much so they really wouldnt pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by a popular vote but of course no voters vote swings a national election. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+0f9da56bc962,EF0D75BF48DA,And thats why I favor in popularity votes because its more fair for the canidates and its a better system in electing a president.            ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+dca8929a00be,EF835E27D5A3,"My name is STUDENT_NAME and as you have been deciding on the choice of making community service a must, I have been asking to see how other people take their views on it ",Lead,Adequate,,,
+229d796f6765,EF835E27D5A3,for instance some people think that community service takes time and energy that they don't have it really makes it impossible for them to do anything. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+305777b6cb6e,EF835E27D5A3,"Can you imagine trying to balance band practice, basketball practice, play practice and community service you might manage for a couple of days but after a few days you will be getting very tired and it would be very hard to manage all of that. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+9a1e1837cd34,EF835E27D5A3,Also some people don't live near the community and still go to this school which isn't bad but it sure isn't good when you have to do community service for this community not the one you live in. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+acd5b34e49e6,EF835E27D5A3,"That would make it partially impossible for you to do everyday and some people have split parents (divorced) which means they are already moving back and forth between them they don't need to be having to go to community service things at the community that they might not even be in at the time, it would screw up the schedules of the parents of the kids and it would put a lot of pressure on the kids to make sure they get it right every time they have to do it. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+5b5afaf51889,EF835E27D5A3,I also see the other side of it on how if we have community service it can bring families together to do something nice for the community. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+7a55ee3e4d00,EF835E27D5A3,"Plus it would help reduce our garbage near and around roads, highways, schools, homes, work places, and public areas which would help make a big difference. If you recycled everything you picked up then you would be reducing greenhouse gas emissions into our atmosphere and making a small step towards a green planet ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f519bfeda5bd,EF835E27D5A3,"It would be hard but we could do it, but it will affect the way people live greatly. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5ee5df33102a,EF835E27D5A3,"In the end it would come down to your choice, will you affect people's lives greatly, or will you let our lives continue on like we are? ",Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+d76d30b4bb9c,EF9A07AA611F,I think it would be best to keep the Electoral College process instead of changing it to popular demand. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4d1f5c508c1b,EF9A07AA611F,The reason why I think that is because I would rather have political experts who study the two candidates based on the speeches they give prior to election day make the decision on who should be our president rather than random voters across the United States. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+62b060ce217d,EF9A07AA611F,I personally think that if we keep the whole Electoral College process our country will improve a lot. ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+86a2b0c72b88,EF9A07AA611F,"On the other hand, if we were to use the popular demand process than voters could discriminate against one candidate and choose the other one. ",Claim,Ineffective,,,
+57f04d8fca00,EF9A07AA611F,On top of that when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of candidates. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+a76e62bf0f01,EF9A07AA611F,"So even if one candidate gets picked over the other, their is still a lot of voting left to be done. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+37d11931c0a1,EF9A07AA611F,I also think if we were to use the Electoral College process it would decrease a lot of arguments and controversy across the United States. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+c5b4c2775631,EF9A07AA611F,"If we were to use the popular demand process their could easily end up being a tie, where as if we were to use the Electoral College process they judges could come to an agreement as to who won the election entirely. Also, if we were to use the Electoral College process their would be no such thing as a run-off election anymore. Usually when you use the popular demand process one state might get more attention then another state, where as Electoral College process will treat each and every state equally. When using the Electoral College process it would be easier to count up the votes because you only have so many voters, where as with the popular demand process there would have to be over 2 million votes counted up. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+21f5a0bcad1e,EF9A07AA611F,There are many other reasons why the Electoral College should be used over the popular demand process. So it shouldnt be hard for you to decide on what process should be used during the Presidential elections. That is why I think the Electoral College process should be used. ,Concluding Statement,Ineffective,,,
+b9916f48d11d,EF9E9C4E5D1E,Getting rid of the electoral college would be a bad idea ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4f619266452e,EF9E9C4E5D1E,because of the ease it puts on voting ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+26df6445b6b1,EF9E9C4E5D1E,it makes the candidates work harder to becaome president. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+871562b0129a,EF9E9C4E5D1E,"When a person runs for president they are trying to take on the hardest job possible, running a country. When they are on their campaign they visit states individual amd they spen alot of time on swing states or the big states such as California, Florida, and Texas. without the electoral college it kinda defeates the purpose for them spending as much time as they do in those states because yes they have a large amount of people but so does every other state, the only large difference now is the amount of electoral votes each one gets. where as with the electoral college they spend more individualized time with each state to try to sway the majority to get all the electoral votes since they cant split them between the candidates. it all comes down to who the smarter candidate is and how they spend time and what they are trying to achive. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+fa642bc3fcb6,EF9E9C4E5D1E,overall the way it is now makes them wotk harder to win the election. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+b90cbfc0d5c4,EF9E9C4E5D1E,with voting no one likes a tie and without the electoral college that can happen. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bb0a04a43fc3,EF9E9C4E5D1E,"In 2000 gore and bush had a fiasco with voting in the presidental election and it was the first time since 1888. Gore who had more popular votes than bush only lost because Bush had the most electoral votes. If it was only up to popular votes than it can easily come down to a tie, what then? recount after recount, or simple debate (but who decides that?). ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+429466ed97d3,EF9E9C4E5D1E,In some cases without the electoral college it could actully make the process because yes they dont have to spend much time campaigning in certain states they get to visit smaller states that tend to get neglected during the campaigns so everyone is more of an informed voter when it comes time to vote ,Claim,Ineffective,,,
+a94242984802,EF9E9C4E5D1E,"lets say bob and sally campaing against each other and with out the electoral college they can go ariund to smaller states and the big ones and when the voting results are in yes they can be closer or larger apart you also see how america feels whenit comes to politics, yes you can see it with the electoral college but it is a smaller amount of votes so it will always be close but seeing how america feels isnt as easy. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f25d6d2b4358,EF9E9C4E5D1E,When it comes down to voting  the Electoral College is an over all easier way to vote and makes the candidates work harder to win an already hard election to run the country.       ,Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+3a68a3c2a0f4,EFA89B6E6F9A,The electorian collage is a very popular thing amonst states ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+8102965d3742,EFA89B6E6F9A,well some states have a just one law for it others are a lot more strict on there laws one of the ways they can win is by a winner take all vote but the other way is by a more popular vote where the people can vote and then the winners of the voting will vote agenst eachother and thoes two states are nebraska and maine ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+f27b60787d70,EFA89B6E6F9A,So what is the electorial collage you might ask well what happends is voters vote not for the president but for a state of electors who in turn elect the president if you lived in texas and voted for john kerry you vote for a state of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry. on the off chance that thoes electors won the statewide electon they would get 34 electoral votes and kerry would get 34 electoral votes.                 ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+cb11d70b3d3e,EFB450A2F170,Do You Know What The Electoral College Is? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+4d61fab9a1d3,EFB450A2F170,"The electoral college is not a place in united states. It is a process that the founing fathers made a long time ago. When they where first making the congress. It is a election of the presient by popular vote of the people in the united states.
+
+The Electoral college is a process. That consists of people that are in congress that help vote for the Presient and Vice President.
+
+The Electoral college consists of 538 elector, But there must be a majority of the 270 electoral votes to elect the next President. Your state's entitle allotment of electors equal to the members in the congress at a time. There most be one house of representetives plus there most be two senators in each states. In congress to make the vote go though.
+
+Under the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of Columbia is allocate  3 electors. They are treated like they are a state that is in the united states, But most people just call them District of columbia.
+
+Each state has a candidate that running for president in there state. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but there a lot of states that are not like that and the vote on who they believe in. Who they think that is going to do the best job as president.
+
+The president election is held every four years. no president can be president more then twice, but there was one person had more then two but that was a thing that happend because there was a war going on.
+
+The presiential election is held every four years on the first tuesday after the first monday on November. you help choose the next president of the united state. but only if you are 18 you can not vote before you are 18.
+
+Most states have a ""winner-take-all"" system that awards alll electors to the winning presient candidate. However, maine and nedraska each have a variation of
+
+"" proportional representation. ""
+
+After the president election, your governor prepares a ""certificate of ascertainment"" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your along with the names of their respective electors. the certificate of ascertianment also declares the winner of the president election that in there state at the meeting of the electors in december of the election year. your state's certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress an the national archives as a part of the official records of the presiential election.                                                                                                                            ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+18d3c9a417dc,EFC2879F0C83,"A very popular topic that has been floating around in recent political conversations is the process, or in more familiar terms: fairness, in the steps used in the Electoral College to select a President for the United States of America. Or, perhaps ironically so, lack therfore of directly selecting a President. It is this particular topic that has inquired me to send you this letter regarding the upcoming debate: Should the Electoral College Stay Or Go?
+
+Now don't get me wrong here: I legitimately don't believe anything I say could really have a major impact on any type of consideration towards this debate, I just hope you read this and ponder it's words to fully make a positive choice-whichever path you choose to side with in this. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+3d439dfff7b0,EFC2879F0C83,Our Forefathers created the Electoral College because they believed it to be the best method in securing a true democratic result for the leader of the USA. People say that the Electoral College is outdated because the times have moved on ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+15e803d25541,EFC2879F0C83,"well then, if that's true, I suppose we should just drop America's image of Freedom because it was made by some stupid old guys. Ummm... No ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+e91bc0ae4ac0,EFC2879F0C83,It is LOGICAL that true DEMOCRACY would be the greater portion of the PEOPLE that VOTE for the PRESIDENT. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+cea90a2de04a,EFC2879F0C83,The opposite side of this argument says that it is unfair some of the states are skipped over because defeat is guarenteed ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bc5cf6da1db7,EFC2879F0C83,Defeat is guarenteed... don't people understand what that means ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+ea270c920128,EFC2879F0C83,"Here, let me explain it to you guys reeeeeeeeeeeeall simple so you can understand it: 1+1=2. ther ya go. job well done.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+6c350ce93cb1,EFCA46E0BF9F,I think that Popular vote would be better than the Electoral College because then the votes would be fair. The Electoral College is not fair for some states. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+e229c7317877,EFCA46E0BF9F,one vote cannot do the job. I agree because they should let the people decide what president they want to have. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+e5830f841773,EFCA46E0BF9F,"Some people may disagree on that. Maybe other people want just states to vote, and get it over with. It would be an easier way to choose the president, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+8786c67e90c1,EFCA46E0BF9F,i think popular vote would be a lot more fair than Electoral College. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+fec82a9f856f,EFCA46E0BF9F,"The popular vote allows people to vote on what president they want to vote for, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+f5279c0bcdf4,EFCA46E0BF9F,"it would be kind of difficult to count all those votes, ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+bd7c1a16a9e6,EFCA46E0BF9F,but it would get the job done in no time. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+bd47e33e8610,EFCA46E0BF9F,"The Electoral College in the other hand, allows votes from states to be made. It is an easier method to get the states to vote for the president, and it takes less time. ",Counterclaim,Ineffective,,,
+81776a4d22d2,EFCA46E0BF9F,"Others may have different opinions, maybe they like the Electoral College better than the popular vote. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+f30d6798ab64,EFCA46E0BF9F,"Many people say that the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and or irrational ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+6095ed5db438,EFCA46E0BF9F,"Even a person, that goes by the name of Bob Dole, said to Abolish the electoral college. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4573bd828721,EFCA46E0BF9F,The Electoral College also avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives majority of the votes cast. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4d4f83c3c17a,EFCA46E0BF9F,this method may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. It also requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9624db84ba9f,EFCA46E0BF9F,"They should really try to make the Electoral College the best method that there can be. Popular vote is already a challenge, but they should also try to improve the popular vote method.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+40825dd673aa,F00B4D036D97,"First and formost, it is my belief that we should keep the electoral college because,it has been around for so many years so the question is why consider changing it now ",Position,Effective,,,
+ed275c12f808,F00B4D036D97,"In 1976 a tie would have occured if a merge of 5,559 voters from ohio and 3,687 voters in hawaii voted the other way ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+4a72f5dc7a0b,F00B4D036D97,just let the popular vote idea be a thing of the past and move on. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8fe999d3d822,F00B4D036D97,"The benifit of having the electoral college is that it is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non democratie method of selecting a president that will handle his job and do what he is supposed to do. 
+",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+0ea4ea657f13,F00B4D036D97,"Thirdly,both the electoral college and popular votes are good options but in my opinion i think the electoral college is better and the electoral college has five reason why they are the best. The method is certainity of an outcome,everyones president,swing states,big states and avoid run off election so that is why i think we should keep the electoral method becuase those five reasons make up the lack of democratic pedigree.    ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+461450078cce,F00FF00D5C8F,"Are you the kind of person that is really interested in political stuff? Politics can be a subject that will start fights, but not everyone is so interested. You must know what the electoral college is. It is a system where when you vote for your president you are actually voting for a group of electors that will then vote for the president(Source 1). This means that even if there is a majority in the popularity vote from the people. The electoral college can over rule that and vote for the other. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+b54413626072,F00FF00D5C8F,Some say the electoral college is good because it prevents ties or because it will make sure there is a winner. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+34829c56613d,F00FF00D5C8F,But if they can over rule your vote are you really voting for your president? ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+90f4a9aee7db,F00FF00D5C8F,I say the electoral college is a bad system and it needs to be extinguished. ,Position,Effective,,,
+3295ce7c2d43,F00FF00D5C8F,There is no doubt that you should get to decide who your leader will be. And if the electoral college can over rule your vote do you really feel like it's your decision? ,Claim,Effective,,,
+a88f756251a5,F00FF00D5C8F,"In the 2000 presidential race, Al Gore lost because he recieved the most popularity votes from the people but the electoral college voted for Bush instead(Source 2). This means that the people thought Al Gore should be the president but instead they didn't get what they wanted because the electoral college thought otherwise. Do you think this is in anyway fair? The majority of the country ended up unhappy with the election because of ther electoral college. I say that alone is enough reason to abolish the electoral college. If it happens once it can happen again. Do you want to feel cheated and betrayed again? Let's get rid of the electoral college! ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+d52e83a9c35b,F00FF00D5C8F,"Some others may say that they support the electoral college because it can't have a tie. ""Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality ina state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state.""(Source 3) ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+9331745a867a,F00FF00D5C8F,"It is still possible to have a tie though because there are 538 total votes and since that is an even number then it can happen. And if there is just a stlight difference and instead the electoral college creates a landslide then that isn't representing the actuall number of the votes by the people. Once again you are being cheated out of your sya it the election. The hardest thing to understand is why people would still support something that doesn't support them. The electoral college basically throws away your votes and replaces them with theirs. And once again, it is possible for ties in the electoral college due to the even number of votes. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+7dcf62517ba7,F00FF00D5C8F,"""Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much to say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters.""(Source 2). This alone shows that your votes are being represented equally. It is saying that 500,000 votes are equal to 35 million votes. Isn't it obvious that those two numbers are very different and they could have a very large effect on the popularity of each canidate that they are voting for? but instead they have they same effect and the 34.5 million voters that don't get their fair say could very possibly be unhappy with the turnout of the president. The people are supposed to be the ones that vote for their leader, not a group of 538 ""qualified"" polititians that can over rule the entire country's vote. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+f1beb3893616,F00FF00D5C8F,I know i want my fair share of input and the electoral college won't allow that. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+bf71351d443d,F00FF00D5C8F,There are supporters who say that they support the electoral college because it avoids run-off elections. Because even if there is a tie in the majority votes from the people it is unlikey for there to be a tie in the votes from the electoral college. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+a50db10659d8,F00FF00D5C8F,"""For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the electoral College...""(Source 3). ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+ed19b1ac35ba,F00FF00D5C8F,"In my opinion if there is a tie in the popularity votes then they should revote, it may take longer but it will still be a decision by the people. Just because it makes the procces faster doesnt mean it makes the procces better. They can create a better system in the event of a tie instead of electors over ruling the people and picking whoever they think is best. That isnt government for the people, by the people. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+408f71d281ad,F00FF00D5C8F,"In conclusion, the electoral college needs to be extinguished for many reasons. those reasons are because it doesn't let the people vote for who they want and it over rules a notions votes. And because it doesnt show the number of votes as equall. Some may say that it is good because it prevents a tie but if there is a tie then I'm sure htere are better ways to revote. we need government for the people, by the people and that isn't what the electoral college is.   ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+2ab788db34a6,F0949D854B5F,I firmly belive that the electoral college is no longer applicible in todays political world. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+1769f21c951d,F0949D854B5F,There have been a number of occations in the past were the electoral college has failed. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+fade4ff327c1,F0949D854B5F,"For example in 2000, al gore won the popular vote, but lost the presedency. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c086df9b9bf,F0949D854B5F,If we live in a deomcorcy the people should be the wons deciding our leader and in this case they did not. The electoral college must be fixed or exsponged imediatley. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+490d2bb2cb23,F0949D854B5F,The electoral college is unfair to voters. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+9008d6ed2336,F0949D854B5F,"The cannidates can take advantage of a states population by only campaining in the states that ""matter"" to them. The president should not be determined by a couple people here and a couble people there. It should be determined by everybody that lives in america. Not a individual state. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8e3db549d257,F0949D854B5F,The biggest problem here is that we (america) are so much more advanced then the system we have right now. Over 200 years later and were still using the same system. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+aa0bbf46ca7c,F0949D854B5F,There is so much more room for improvment but that is not happening. The advances weve made in so many aspects of goverment are not being translated into the electoral college. Its time for a change in our favor. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+73c7cd20f814,F0949D854B5F,"In conclusion, the entire electoral college needs some major renovations. I ask for the issue to be reconzied and for a change to happen. I thank you for lisening to my opinion. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+d18847ead52c,F09F6824032D,I belive  we should change the way for election ,Position,Adequate,,,
+80b68384be6f,F09F6824032D,"Under the electoral colloge system voters vote  for a state of electors who turn elect the president, and that not right ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+3890f355bc21,F09F6824032D,"Say if i were to buy a big pizza ,and it was cut into 4 big pices and 8 small. The 8 people ate there pizza but it didnt really matter but when the the other 4 people ate there pizza it did . ok say if i weree to have a even pizza  4/4  . one half where the people and the other half was the big people in charge so u can say....no matter what the people say its only going to have like 25/100 effect.
+
+After reading a text its says ""when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually vothing for a slate of electors' ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83fa132cf713,F09F6824032D,other reason u should change the electon collge is lack of democratic pedigree are all reason that this is not reliable ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+03ebee2c5157,F09F6824032D,despite its almost happing its not really a good way to do it. am  give i an  exaple Obama recived 61.7 percent of the  electoral vote compared to only 51.3 precent of the popular votes.    ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bc7d42e96d4e,F0AA6B265B6F,"As a deadly disease, COVID-19, sweeps across the globe many school systems are looking to a extend period of time were the majority of their students will be in isolation. One way that school systems have attempted to avoid set backs in education during this time has been the use of online education resources. This system is effective in times were students can not physically attend school but would have catastrophic results if implemented into long-term plans. Although many supporters of online education would argue that it reduces the likelihood, and effect, of social problems that are commonly seen in schools, ",Lead,Effective,,,
+aadb3b0271c6,F0AA6B265B6F,distance learning would cause major problems to students and destroy the positive developments the current education system has encourage. ,Position,Effective,,,
+6f7b73d7c1f4,F0AA6B265B6F,"Some of the developments that would be removed from the education system are: an equal access to physical school resources across the school, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+0fe61cba4a9d,F0AA6B265B6F,"the ability for students to preform in after school activities, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+35469d2faecf,F0AA6B265B6F,"the current sociological benefits of doing school work at a physical school. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,
+14f334d06cc4,F0AA6B265B6F,"The problems that education faces across the country may be chronic, but schools still provide an equal access to help outside of the classroom across the school. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+73641da1fc3e,F0AA6B265B6F,"A major resource that all students have access to is a school library. In some communities school libraries are the only libraries students have access to so they are the sole gateway to information outside of classes. Another resource is students access to teachers, this is critical to their learning and allows for them to conference about difficulties they are facing in the class. Most current forms of online school would eliminate teacher conferencing from schooling though. Finally some areas of the country lack internet access for many reasons. In these areas the implementation of online schooling would be impossible without major invest by the school system which in most likely is underfunded. The physical resources that can only be present at a school serve as a strong argument against online schooling. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+4d1b76fb17e5,F0AA6B265B6F,With the implementation of online schooling the ability for students to participate in extracurriculars is immediately called into question. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+237da8132f6b,F0AA6B265B6F,"Without a physical building to meet in everyday many extracurriculars lack the funds to rent out a separate property and would quickly fold. Even students that were invested in an after school activity before a switch to online schooling occurred would face the difficulty in their ability to travel to the new meeting place of their activity. Many students do not have access to a car, either for financial or legal reasons (they do not have a license yet), so busing is the only way these students are able to travel to and from the school. With online schooling this busing would no longer be consistent and many after school activities would see huge drops in participation or fold entirely. This would be detrimental to the students who any have the talents to successes in other activities outside of the school. This would limit the opportunities students have causing the diversity of experiences the rising generation would have. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+764e60948207,F0AA6B265B6F,"A common challenge that schools face is the maintaining of a ""learning environment"", although this may be difficult to deal with, this would be impossible for online education to fix. The transfer of learning from schools to the home would cause the ""learning environment"" to cease to exist. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f8a97eda8ed6,F0AA6B265B6F,"Although schools can issue computers that can only access education resources, ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+07d9031a75a2,F0AA6B265B6F,there are still physical distractions that schools cannot stop. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d714001d66c2,F0AA6B265B6F,"This is a challenge that many home school students have had to face but they are better equipped to solve this problem. Home schooled students typically get around distractions by having a dedicated space for school. This works for the typically wealthier home school students whose families can afford an extra room in the house. This solution is next to impossible to maintain in cities or impoverished areas were all the rooms in a given house are taken up, or potentially over used. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+db8af6afb7ee,F0AA6B265B6F,"The implementation of online schooling would destroy one of the greatest aspects of traditional schooling, the ""learning environment"". ",Claim,Effective,,,
+27ef2a3c3207,F0AA6B265B6F,Many supporters of online education say that it significantly reduces the chances of social problems that arrive from traditional schooling such as bullying. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+184c3b08e181,F0AA6B265B6F,"There are two main fallacies in this argument: first, that bullying can still happen outside of school; and second, that this sheltering makes it easier for bullying to occur later in life. ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+dd77b7cc1c14,F0AA6B265B6F,"Cyberbullying has become an ever greater threat to students and schools have been largely unequipped to deal with the problem head on. Online schooling would only magnify the problem by allowing problems to go undetected with the school having limited access to what is going on only when students are logged into a computer. The second problem arises from the transition that students make from high school to college. This serves as a difficult time for students already with hazing, bullying, and other bad social behaviors occurring. If a student is sheltered for all of their public education, from kindergarten to 12th grade, they are exposed to this harsh environment without the social skills or experience required to navigate these turbulent times. Instead of stopping the problem of bulling, online education only seeks to kick the problem further down the road. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+56f646b9ff82,F0AA6B265B6F,"Online education as a whole may appear promising in its abilities to ""level the playing field"" but it instead, if implemented, would result in a regression on many of the fronts; namely: physical school resources, after school activities, and the benefits from a dedicated school building. This would make the ""playing field"" of education only more uneven. As the COVID-19 virus sweeps across the country and schools must look to online schools for a time, it will be necessary for schools to remember the benefits of traditional education and see online schooling as only a temporary fix. ",Concluding Statement,Effective,,,
+811441a5066a,F0E863BDEB82,"In this essay, I will be discussing the non-existence of ancient Martians that theorists claim to be real because of a land formation that lots of people so passionately call ""the Face"". ",Position,Adequate,,,
+c97415e737fe,F0E863BDEB82,"First and formost, Martians have been wafting around the population; because of the amount of time it has been around and all of the conspiracy, this has lead many conspirarists to go to extremes to prove that anything that anyone can believe in is real. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+83f530d73868,F0E863BDEB82,"For instance, now people are starting to prove that aliens are real because of a big face-shaped mountain on Mars. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+4c65310c32dd,F0E863BDEB82,"This is, of course, completely absurd to say the very least, due to the lack of evidence they have in corrispondence to the large amount of evidence that we at NASA already have. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+955ad984ac3d,F0E863BDEB82,"Really though-- all they have are sci-fi movies, fiction novels, and talk-shows-- when we have already proven that it is obviously just an odd formation (that with shadows, angles, and imagination) just looks like a face. After the Mars Global Surveyor flew by Cydonia one day in April, it was completely proven to be just your average land formation. Afterwards, skeptics still were not satisfied, even with the incontroversial evidence that all it was was a rock formation. So, we flew by AGAIN, just to prove that that was all it was ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6e79f861ebed,F0E863BDEB82,"So, that was the complete and utter proof that this so-called ""Face"" was just a big rock in the end. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+4a44116607d1,F10231811C61,Online school at home would better a student's education in many ways especially because they know they are in a comfortable and safe environment. It increases their ability to complete more work while also being in an environment the student feels most comfortable in. Online classes can benefit the student and parent. ,Lead,Adequate,,,
+64d19ddc447b,F10231811C61,Students would benefit from being able to attend classes at home ,Position,Effective,,,
+057b8060b9f2,F10231811C61,it increases the students ability to focus knowing they're in a safe place ,Claim,Effective,,,
+3177cfaa1374,F10231811C61,creates less distractions like there would be in a classroom ,Claim,Effective,,,
+314bb6c2cce3,F10231811C61,"it would help the student complete work faster without having to travel from classroom to classroom. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+00abb6fcdef0,F10231811C61,"To begin with, attending school online at home is very beneficial, in some cases especially to certain students. It increases the ability to focus. This is because the student would know they are in a safe and comfortable place, which is the most important reason. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+05d36fea6a21,F10231811C61,"Continuing on, bullying has been a serious issue in today's society. It has come to a point where students feel unprotected in a place where their parents and teachers may think they feel safe. School is portrayed as a safe environment and should be. Although, in some situations it is not and many students have dealt with bullying in a learning environment. Bullying makes it difficult for any student to come to school focused and feel comfortable with who they are. Adding on to this reason, school shootings are another very important problem for why it is safer for students to attend online school at home. This dangerous act shatters the idea of any school being safe knowing someone could get hurt or worse. Attending online school helps avoid these kinds of situations. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+8dc995729c41,F10231811C61,"Furthermore, staying at home all day and everyday decreases the student's chances to get distracted from their education. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+a0b4fe0ece28,F10231811C61,"Online school at home prevents that from happening. For example, other students wouldn't be able to create distractions by being loud and speaking to another student when they are trying to learn. Many students cause distractions in class when the teacher is teaching or out of the classroom. Although, it is up to the student whether or not they will allow their classmate to get them off task or ignore their distractions. In some cases, the student can be responsible enough to but in others many students may find it difficult. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f9975bc7e689,F10231811C61,"Continuing on, school online helps get work done faster without having to travel from classroom to classroom in a class for only an hour and a half or less. ",Claim,Effective,,,
+ae03b2c12e44,F10231811C61,"It decreases the time to finish work at home rather than at school. Most online school programs offer as much time as you need on an assignment. Although, once you've started one there is of course, a deadline. Attending online school at home is very benefitial in this reason because it would make it easier for the student. On that note, if a student were to be having trouble with an assignment online they would be able to turn it in once they have understood it completely or if not the student could move on to another subject and come back to it. That is what makes online school at home very helpful and beneficial. In a classroom that would not be possible, in some cases, they would have no other choice but to turn it when needed to and accept the consequences. ",Evidence,Effective,,,
+159991e63de3,F10231811C61,"In conclusion, some students may not be able to attend online school because of eletricity problems or the student doesn't have a computer at home. ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e4fdca52e3d1,F10231811C61,"In situations like these, the school should help provide the student with the appropriate equipment and better their education. ",Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+402b21a6c3c3,F10231811C61,"All of the reasons stated are very important and should be taken into consideration when deciding to attend online classes at home. It benefits a students education incredibly. To conclude, online school would make everything easier for not only the student but the parent too. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+34a6afa921e8,F15EC33EC261,I think they should ,Position,Ineffective,,,
+64bb6099c7e2,F15EC33EC261,"because the electoral college is a process not a place. The founding father established it in the constitition as the compromise between election of the President by a popular vote. The electoral college cobsists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Your state's entitles allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each memeber in the house of representatives plus two for your senators. Each candiate running for president in your state has hin or her own group of electors. The Electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.
+
+The presidential election is held every four years on the tuesday after the first monday in november. You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President  because when you vote for your candidate  you actually voting for your candidate's electors. After the presidential election, your governor prepares a ""Certifacte of Ascertainent"" lsiting all of the candidates  who ran for president in your state along  with the names of their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state  at the meeting of the electors in december of the election year. Your state's certificates of acertainments are sent to the congres and the national archives as part of the official records of the presential election.
+
+Under the electoral college system, voters not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president. if you lived in texas, for example, and and wanted to vote for john kerry, you'd vote for a slate of democatic  electors pledged to kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors? They can anyone not holding public office it depends on the state. That is how it works this is my reason.    ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+d8e20cfa2134,F163B4249C07,I think that we should be aloud to have phones at school because what if there is somebody that died or is in the hospital now ,Position,Adequate,,,
+d7dfaebc3df1,F163B4249C07,The school never answerer the phone so they can talk to parents. That is why we should be aloud to have phone in this hell hole. The teachers would not like that but they could get over it and like it. I don't no why they think we don't take are phone to class because we do. The teachers have there's and they ant aloud to have them. There phone go off and they don't get in trouble like we do. I think that is wrong but you no how they pay each other so they wont right each other up. They don't have the right to play on the phone. ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1fe4e031f412,F163B4249C07,The teacher think they should be aloud to have there phone but we ant. I think teachers should not be aloud to have phone if cant. If they pass the law then it wont be as bad. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+4abd600e467a,F163B4249C07,"I think it is wrong for the teachers to take your phone away.
+
+If teachers have there phone we should be aloud to take them away and take them to the principal. If we did that then the teacher would have a problem on picking on us. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+bf64df29b864,F186ACA75002,I belive that in favoring of keeping the Electoral College. ,Position,Adequate,,,
+5dc6edc36294,F186ACA75002,"Therefore many people have different minds set if which they should have Electoral college. Here 's some background information stated in source 1 What Is The Electoral College ""The Electoral College is a process not a place'."" The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise betwwen of the president by a vote in congress and the election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. ",Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+fcdfc4190c65,F186ACA75002,because electoral college can be helpful ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+0608a263ff1e,F186ACA75002,"have people to rethink, ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+c72c64147f0e,F186ACA75002,understandable ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8645880f2a5b,F186ACA75002,Many people thing of electoral college as torchure or even the wrong way to vote. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+c312a14bf786,F186ACA75002,"Electoral college have different ways and similar ways from changing to the election by the popular for the president of United States.For example states in source one ""The Electoral College consists of the 538 electors"".""A Majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president."" ",Rebuttal,Ineffective,,,
+ac50474a1903,F186ACA75002,.Pertaining about how can electoral college can be helpful in a different ways of changing the president vote. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+93a98164bbc2,F186ACA75002,"For example what  might you think what would be helpful?Stated in source two people thinks ""Under the electoral college sytem voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president"". Now as you come to  mind this particular information is not only talking about coloubia is talking about the electoral collge also.According To Source Three ""And if an electoral tie seems unlikely,consider this:In 1968, a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election;In 1976,a tie would have occured if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way"". ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+d40f586f6eb3,F186ACA75002,People should rethink about their desicions before they pick and choose. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1f0aecdaeca3,F186ACA75002,"According to source three ""The Electoral Collge requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal.The  Electora is widely regarded as an anachronis, a non-democratic method of selecting a presiendt hat ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes.There are many diffent aspects of Electoral College. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+13d54e41da90,F186ACA75002,Most importantly electoral college is that it can be understandable ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+13e6aff8d163,F186ACA75002,".It can be understandable by allowing people to knowing the method of electoral college.According to resource one ""Electoral College method is not democractic in a modern snese...it is the electors who elect the president not the president. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9b53f5b55fad,F186ACA75002,"In conclusion I strongly I favor of Electoral College because its can be helpful and let people rethink  about their decsion and understand the concept of voting for your president. 
+",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+a598ffefeca5,F18B05581BAA,Do you like online classes or going to school? ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+6be862b75bd2,F18B05581BAA,I think going to school is the better option ,Position,Adequate,,,
+4738a1e487bd,F18B05581BAA,because if you take online classes you cant ask questions ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+87d51fd38249,F18B05581BAA,dont get the full experience of class ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8e8e82619c55,F18B05581BAA,and you also dont meet new friends and people. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+1749bfcba2f5,F18B05581BAA,When you are in school you are able to be with the teacher. It is easier to ask questions so they can demonstrate or answer and explain it to you. I feel it is easier to understand if you are shown and told verbally instead of through email or text ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5f0089f26ebd,F18B05581BAA,It is much harder to ask questions if you are doing it through a computer ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+181ac07810b9,F18B05581BAA,If you are online you do not get the full experiences as you do with going to school ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+50590832d132,F18B05581BAA,"You cant join clubs,go to fun pep rallies, or even go on field trips. Going to school may seem boring and useless but it gives you experience, especially with adult figures. Online classes dont offer sports so if you wanted to join a sport you cant through a computer, unless you are playing online. Once you get out of school you will miss it. It is a great time to explore who you are and who you want to be. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+02452868032f,F18B05581BAA,Finally if you dont go to school you will not make new friends ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+8d2cbcb01786,F18B05581BAA,It is hard to make new friends and meet new people through a computer. It is so much fun making friends in a school full of one thousand people. It is great to be in school and have friends in your classes. School is like a pool full of new and mysterious people. It is good to have teachers by your side for help. Friends are a really good support system. If you are home and something happens it is good to go to school and talk to your friends about it instead of staying home and keeping it in. Friends help with a lot that you need. ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+50803523749a,F18B05581BAA,"I get that home school is fun but it isnt always the best choice. Online classes may sound so cool, you can just stay in your pajamas all day long and do your work ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+be3284db576e,F18B05581BAA,but is staying home all the time really that fun. Dont you just want to get out there and have somewhere to be. ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+5e73f9bffc7a,F18B05581BAA,"Home school isnt so fun when something happens at home and you have nobody to talk to or nowhere to go. 
+",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+203c82939530,F18B05581BAA,"Going to school is still the best option because you cant make friends,you dont get the full experience, and you cant ask teachers questions one on one. Going to school is a really good opportunity for everyone to find out who you are. School is a fun and enjoying place, it has so many opportunities you would never get doing online classes. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+71388243ded7,F19F66A28B7E,Many parents home school their kids. ,Lead,Ineffective,,,
+0f92d1b68ac0,F19F66A28B7E,I would agree that if students took classes from home it would benefit them ,Position,Adequate,,,
+f477ec5b04fa,F19F66A28B7E,Some of my reasons why they would benefit from home is that there would be less bullying at schools. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+71d11f2bbb46,F19F66A28B7E,"Also, you would catch less viruses and not get sick as often. ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+f9b0621bbda1,F19F66A28B7E,It would also release stress off students. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+092ec5190eb1,F19F66A28B7E,Bullying has become a massive problem at schools. Many teens have taken their own life because they would get bullied everyday at school ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+4eb57043a0d6,F19F66A28B7E,If we would home school our kids more often then there would be less bullying at schools ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+22ed74fae4d0,F19F66A28B7E,They wouldn't have to face that group of people that bully them or maybe just that one kid that shows up everyday to just bully your kid. Some children just forget about school in general and don't want go anymore or they just care less about their grades because what their worry about most is that bully and not about school anymore ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+9c0d5deccccd,F19F66A28B7E,"Also, I feel that children would get their work done faster and have less stress then other students that go to public schools and they would get better grades because they have more time study ",Claim,Adequate,,,
+d068eca9f376,F19F66A28B7E,"Critics would argue that if students get home schooled they wouldn't get to go out explore the real world. Also, they would fear to talk to people they don't know and only talk to people they do know and that would affect the way the interact with others and could effect the way they attend colleges or interviews for jobs or colleges ",Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+57da33fb33c0,F19F66A28B7E,Many students feel that you don't need to know a lot of people to be happy ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+15d57ce6c1cf,F19F66A28B7E,"All you need is your family to support you in school and out in the real world. Also, your parents could help you with somethings you wouldn't understand at school. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+5aeb8bf99589,F19F66A28B7E,One more benefit of being home schooled is that your would spend more time with your family members and could focus more on school. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+80f06c424954,F19F66A28B7E,Another reason why being home schooled is a benefit is that you would not catch the virus that's going around. ,Claim,Adequate,,,
+2fabd02a3e29,F19F66A28B7E,Many students get sick because they go to public schools. If your parents would home school you that would prevent you from getting sick or maybe you catching that deadly virus. you wouldn't be interacting with other students and that would be good for your system which means not getting sick as often. If you do get sick you would be home schooled so you could do your work at anytime and turn it in at anytime with out getting points deducted ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+8f2596cf151d,F19F66A28B7E,Critics would argue that many students would get sick still. ,Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+e44e39cec0b2,F19F66A28B7E,They could become home sick and would want to go out and still catch that deadly virus going around ,Evidence,Adequate,,,
+6419cf7c3b76,F19F66A28B7E,"Also, being home sick could affect the way you learn at home ",Counterclaim,Adequate,,,
+9dcd465d236f,F19F66A28B7E,Many students could say that if you do get home sick you could you just go to your backyard and just sit their and enjoy the sun for a little while ,Rebuttal,Adequate,,,
+d0686553b652,F19F66A28B7E,"Also, you would be able to go out and where a mask which many schools don't let you do that. If you are home schooled chance are you wouldn't catch a deadly virus as easy as a public school student. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+dabe4d4fdc97,F19F66A28B7E,"Overall, students that get home school have more benefits than public school students. They wouldn't get bullied as easy as public school students. Also, they would not catch a deadly virus as easy as public schools and many home school students would have less stress than public school students. ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+405481d0ddb5,F1A0D1F81017,"Driverless cars seem like an impossibility.
+
+They seem like something out of a futuristic movie or comic book.
+
+However, today's evidence proves that driverless cars are a realistic possibility.
+
+Advancements in technology today provide tangible evidence that driverless cars could play a prominent role in the near future. ",Lead,Effective,,,
+1fb288e0bcaf,F1A0D1F81017,Driverless cars should be developed and dissimenated ,Position,Adequate,,,
+a83491f56f82,F1A0D1F81017,"they are more efficient, ",Claim,Effective,,,
+6b4eb836709e,F1A0D1F81017,would increase safety ,Claim,Effective,,,
+6727cec53556,F1A0D1F81017,would increase the quality of life for drivers. ,Claim,Effective,,,
+7e893528be13,F1A0D1F81017,"
+Driverless cars are much more efficient. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+a221c6e0d5b6,F1A0D1F81017,"The article ""Driverless cars are coming"" states, ""The cars [Google cofounder Sergey Brin] foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.""
+
+Obviously, driverless cars would increase the efficiency of vehicles and use half as much fuel.
+
+This would benefit both the owner of the car and the environment.
+
+Pollution from cars is a real problem and, if cars only used half of the fuel, then this terrible pollution would be minimized.
+
+Also, if the cars use half as much fuel, then our natural resources would be preserved and the cost of driving a car would be lessened. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+f0f38a57d932,F1A0D1F81017,"Also, Driverless cars are safe. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+0ec43994e10d,F1A0D1F81017,The biggest problem with driverless cars is that it is difficult to enable them to manuever around unexpected problems like car accidents or construction areas. ,Counterclaim,Effective,,,
+72b63234cf0c,F1A0D1F81017,"However, driverless cars are now able to notify the driver when he or she needs to take over the controls in trecherous situations ",Rebuttal,Effective,,,
+4907d3245df5,F1A0D1F81017,"his ability to notify the driver when needed will make driverless cars much safer.
+
+If the car is unable to manuever through a situation safely, it will force the driver to take over.
+
+This nullifys the arguement that driverless cars are not safe because it proves that driverless cars notify the driver at any unsafe moment and enable the driver to take over the controls of the car.
+
+Otherwize, the driverless car can handle the terrain on its own. ",Evidence,Adequate,,,
+335be7d1b88f,F1A0D1F81017,"Finally, driverless cars would increase the quality of life for the driver. 
+",Claim,Effective,,,
+42e092690ac4,F1A0D1F81017,"In tedious situations like a traffic jam, driving is boring and energy wasting.
+
+However, driverless cars can take away the exhausting driving experience and allow the driver to relax.
+
+For example, ""Traffic Jam Assistant"" will be very helpful to anyone in a traffic jam because it would take away the boredom of driving in a traffic jam.
+
+Traffic Jam Assistant enables the car to handle driving functions up to 25 miles per hour.
+
+This would be very helpful in a long and tedious traffic jam because one does not drive over 25 miles per hour in a traffic jam.
+
+Also, if taxis could be driverless cars, the quality of life for the average citizen would increase.
+
+Taxis would cost less money, they would be open more often, and they could take passengers to farther destinations.
+
+This would dramatically increase the quality of life for all people and it would make owning a car almost antiquated.
+
+this would provide much finacianal saving for the average person and it would provide a great deal of convinience for the average person as well. 
+",Evidence,Effective,,,
+51494063c63d,F1A0D1F81017,"In conclusion,
+
+Driverless cars would be extremely beneficial.
+
+They would increase efficiency, increase safety, and improve the quality of life for all people.
+
+Driverless cars would drastically change the way people live.
+
+If cars could drive themslelves, the quality of life would be incredibly increased for all people and the world would not be the same.  ",Concluding Statement,Adequate,,,
+f08400586f84,F1A43B355944,In my personal oppinion I think it's best to keep the Electoral College. ,Position,Effective,,,
+dd488e925a9f,F1A43B355944,we the people we really can't make good decisions. For instance what they say may blind us from the hard on facts and we'll make a horrible decision just because they can manipulate us with words ,Evidence,Ineffective,,,
+1ce7cdce87b3,F1A43B355944,"The Electoral College can pick the person that is perfect for the job but we can't. 
+",Claim,Adequate,,,