@bethanyk14 (Annie) posted a new topic, subject "Fast Story Reviews! [CLOSED TEMPORARILY)". It read:

   Hey! I'm always looking for new stories to discover and read!  
    For new authors, I always find that it's helpful to have your stories reviewed as it provides insight to your story, and how you can improve it.  
    The point of my reviews is to help authors improve, and increase the quality of your stories. To do this, I will be grading the quality of multiple aspects of your story using the grading rationale below. After, I will give you a score/percentage out of 100 points.  
    Please do not be offended by your score! This is just my personal opinion! Also, I know nobody's story is perfect, especially at the beginning. I know even my story has improved so much from the time that I have began.
    
    **Grading Rationale**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning:
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning:
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning:
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning:
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning:
    
    **If you want to have your story reviewed, please fill out this template:**
    
    Title:  
    Author:  
    Number of Episodes:  
    Additional notes:
    
    **In Return…**
    
    It would also be highly appreciated if you checked out my story “Gang Affiliated”. This is not a requirement but it would be nice because I'm spending a lot of time reviewing your story and helping you to improve.

To which @Funicidal (𝑽 𝒂 𝒏 𝒏 𝒆) replied

    Alright, I'm trying this since I'm awfully bored atm  Here you go 
    
    **Title** : Sweet Innocence  
    **Author** : Funicidal  
    **Number of Episodes** : Currently 1 completed, 2 in progress  
    **Additional notes** : My first (published) story in which I already expect perfection. _(Hope it worked)_

To which @Manna (Manna) replied

    Hi. I will be sure to check out your story soon and PM you.
    
    Title: Mei  
    Author: Manna  
    No. Of Episodes: 4 publushed  
    Additional information: English is like my fourth language so it's not perfect. I hope you like it.
    
    Thank you.

So @Mzking replied

    Title: Breaking the Cycle  
    Author: Mz.King  
    Number of Episodes:12 ongoing  
    Additional info: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4930564647944192
    
    I will read yours also, Thank you

Then @bethanyk14 (Annie) said

    **Sweet Innocence**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, **9** , 10  
    Reasoning: Some errors, I found. “but everything must come to and end…” (should be an end).  
    “come to school in time…” (on time.)
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, **10**  
    Reasoning: Amazing directing! This must have taken you forever! I love all of the background characters in every scene.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, **6** , 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Obviously, I can't make much of a judgement because only the first episode is published, but nothing really goes on in the first episode. Although it's extremely well made, it's more or less boring… I'm sure the plot with get a lot better in the following episodes, though.
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, **8** , 9, 10  
    Reasoning: It's a good length, but I think it would be better if you could increase the length so you could add a cliffhanger at the end.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, **10**  
    Reasoning: I love this cover! I especially enjoy how the background is black and white, and the font is light purple, and it the first thing the reader's eyes are drawn to.
    
    Score: **86%**

To which @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    Hey! I can't find your story on the app. Could you post a link please? Thanks!

After which, @Funicidal (𝑽 𝒂 𝒏 𝒏 𝒆) added

    Thank you for your review! It will help me improve my story in the future as I continue it.

@Manna (Manna) replied

    Mei  
    Here it is.

@bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **Breaking the Cycle**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, **3** , 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: “Every child hopes they can… live happily, [and] grow up not…” (Should be and in between).  
    “I never seen him” (Should be I had never seen him). “You are your daughter is holding me back” (Should be are holding me back). “she's your problem” (Capitalize s in she.) “Your self…” (Yourself is one word.) “inwhich” (in the author's note, in and which should be separated.) “would you like to continue on” (w in would should be capitalized.) “This tew much” (Should be “too” instead of "tew.) “And your the one to blame” (Should be you're.) “This Is all your fault…” (I in is should not be capitalized.)
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, **4** , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Mom's mouth isn't moving when she was on the phone (in the first line.) Also when on the phone, there is a lot of dialogue in one speech bubble. Separate the lines of dialogue. This also happens in the author's note and other times. It's a very long paragraph. Abuse seen is a bit choppy. Is the mother layered over the child correctly? Did you use pauses in your script? There is talking while the character is thinking. Too many transitions where the scene fades out.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, 4, **5** , 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Interesting, but not much happens in the first episode. There should be a cliffhanger or some sort at the end to make the reader want to continue reading.
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, **4** , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: The first episode is a bit short. It only provides an introduction to the story. I am not sure if this is enough to make readers want to continue reading.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, **4** , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: In my personal opinion, I don't enjoy this cover all that much. It doesn't tell the viewer what your story will be about. Also, there are black rectangles on top and below the image.
    
    Score: **40%**

@Mzking replied

    Thank you for your feed back… It's my first story through mobile creation so I am currently getting use to the dialog and everything. As far as the cover I've tried to find something dealing with the title and the grammar I will work on that also. Also for anyone reading my story currently, it does gets better along the way, so please continue to work with me as I work on the story…

So @KatieR.Writes (Katie R) replied

    I'll check your story out!
    
    Title ~ RUUN AWAY  
    Author ~ Katie R  
    Number of episodes ~ Four!  
    Additional Notes ~ Second published story!

To which @mysoxlike2party (mysoxlike2party) replied

    Title: Illegal Alien  
    Author: Literally Dead  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional notes: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6005998233452544
    
    Your story sounds cool! I will be checking it out.  
    Thank you in advance!

@mmLunixmm (Lunix) replied

    Title: My Smartboy  
    Author: Lunixfrozy  
    Number of episodes: 17  
    Additional Notes: None

So @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **Mei**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, **9** , 10  
    Reasoning: “He is upto something…” (Up to instead of upto). That's the only error I saw.
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, **8** , 9, 10  
    Reasoning: When choosing what dreams meant to Mei, I chose that dreams are signs given by nature. But then, even though I chose that option, Mei ignored the dream anyways. So, it's like my choice didn't even matter. When you choose the author's choice outfit, why is there no going back? When talking with Janet, the screen is in zone 2 instead of zone 1. I can't see the characters talking. Also when choosing to stay calm or freak out, a message popped up saying she chose not to show her emotions. I don't think this is necessarily true. She's showing her emotions, but in a calm matter. Also, if she cared about Thea why wouldn't she want her to get adopted? At the fighting scene, it just started pouring out of nowhere. Also, the black screen at the end was very long. Other than that, the directing is very well done.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, **4** , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: The plot is unclear. I've read the first episode and I still have no idea where this is going. I get that she's had a rough past, gets nightmares, and probably is a spy or just kills bad people for a reason. If it follows cliche it's because her parents were killed by a gang and let me guess- she's killing bad guys because she wants to get revenge for the death of her parents? And she likes visiting the orphanage because she herself didn't have parents when she was young so she wants to help the children that were like her…?
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, **7** , 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: The length is a fine. At the beginning, it is a bit boring when you just have to watch her walk/drive all the way home and into her room. In the middle it also gets a bit boring because the reader does not know the character all that well. The end in my personal opinion is the best part because there's conflict.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, **7** , 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Visually, the cover is very aesthetically pleasing. However, it doesn't really tell me what the story is about, especially when reading the description. If reader's don't know what the story is generally about, I'm not sure if they will want to read it.
    
    Score: **70%**

Then @Manna (Manna) said

    Actually you are wrong about the plot. Her parents aren't killed by a gang. She doesn't go killing people. She just fights the bad and is on the side of the just. And the orphanage she goes there not because she is an orphan. See her mother passed away recently. And if you read the part where she and Thea talk you would have known(Episode 1). Honestly you have judged and misinterpreted the story just because she is fighting some gang member and likes to visit an orphanage. She likes to visit the orphanage because of the children. She likes to fight. She wants to teach them some defence. She is isn't force to fight because of any kind of revenge but she chose that path for herself because she loves it.

@Manna (Manna) replied

    I apologize if my pervious post sounded rude or mean. I know my story isn't cliché. It's not perfect. I know. It has its flaws and I am working towards it. But in no way what you predicted about the plot is true. Since you have read just one Episode I don't blame you. If you read more than one you would have known it better. But that's your choice. Thank you for putting your time into reading it.

So @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **Run Away**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, **6** , 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: “…Friends, Family, and Love.” (Not sure why those are capitalized.) “I step out and go to mirror.”(Should be go to the mirror, or look at the mirror.) “…Who's to weak for this world.” (Should be “who's too weak…”) It bothers me that when for the choice of an outfit, it's “yes” and “no.” There shouldn't be “.” after no. “Twenty nineth” (Should be twenty ninth.) “I cant get it…” (can't.) “Welcome, To my home.” (To should not be capitalized.) _Side note- I thought she was staying at a hotel, so technically, isn't it not her home?_ “…to exhausted…” (Too.)
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, **6** , 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: She smiled and said poker face. Isn't poker face when your face is neutral? The covers don't match the covers on the bed as shown in her bedroom background. Smg.episode has some great overlays that you can use! There were no background characters when she went out. I know you said the town was deserted but still… The outfit she chose to go out in was the outfit I chose for her to wear that morning. It's a bit strange to wear the same outfit.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, **7** , 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Okay, she said she was only an hour from her hometown in New York. But she told the girl that she was from London. Unless you meant New London, this cannot be true. It's also kind of weird that Lexi would get in the elevator knowing she was terrified of them. Like, she could of just taken the stairs or something. I enjoy the rest of the plot, however. I enjoy how she mentions her background but does not elborate.
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, **6** , 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: It was a fine length, it jut ended at a weird spot. You should always leave the reader on a cliffhanger, especially on the first episode when it's crucial for the reader to decide if they want to continue reading or not.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, **3** , 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Personally, I don't like the scarlson@example.com. It's a typically cliche girl that's sad because she ran away. Also, why does the title just say “Away” and not the entire title? It looks like the person who made you the cover only made a large cover- and then you used the large cover for the small cover as well, even though it's the incorrect size!
    
    Score: **56%**

@bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    Phew! I'm so glad it's not a typical gang story! The beginning and everything about the character just is so alike the story “Playing for Keeps” which I have already read all of the episodes for!

After which, @Manna (Manna) added

    I haven't read it. Sorry if there are similarities. Actually I am working on editing the script and adding more about her mother into the first episode itself. I am glad you liked the ending of Episode 1.

After which, @Gracex (Grace ) added

    Hey! So I think my story may have a slow start but I would love any feedback you can give me I will also check out your story 
    
    Story Title : The Art of The Deal  
    Author : GraceX  
    Style : Ink  
    Episodes : 9 ongoing  
    Genre: Romance drama and comedy
    
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4622710791208960
    
    Story: Isobel lives a secret life but is captured by Dark Chaos, a gang with a twist. Fighting for the greater good! But have there lives crossed before

After which, @cateyedgoddess (Cat) added

    Title: The Most Powerful Scream  
    Author: CatEyedGoddess  
    Number of Episodes: 5 (ongoing)  
    Additional notes: It's under Comedy, but it's more of a Dramedy (Comedy+Drama)
    
    Thank you so much if you review it! I'll definitely check out yours!

So @zetti (Zetti) replied

    Story Title: The Struggles Within  
    Author: Zetti  
    Style: Ink  
    Chapters: 25 (ongoing)  
    Genre: Drama  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6747642307280896

After which, @candidlycannie (Candidly Cannie) added

    This is my first story  
    I hope that you'll enjoy it and leave any comments or feedbacks as you like  
    There's currently only 4 episodes and more coming  
    It's about two friends, you (female) and your male friend, and your friend has an arranged marriage with someone who barely knows him. And it's your job to make her fall in love with your best friend.  
    I appreciate it if you give it a try
    
    Title: Invitation Only  
    Genre: Romance  
    Style: Limelight
    
    episodeinteractive.com
    
    ### The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Invitation Only
    
    Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

After which, @igunver (igunver) added

    Hello there! =))  
    I could use some feedback. Thanks in advance.
    
    Title: RUBY and the Secrets  
    Author: I.G. (or i.gunver)  
    Number of Episodes: 11 (and ongoing)  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5312744157085696​​​​​​​

To which @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    Will get to these reviews in a bit! Hang tight!

Then @DestinysTragedy (Meaghan) said

    Hi Bethnay!
    
    I'd love if you could give me some feedback on my story!
    
    Title: Recovery in 5  
    Author: DestinysTragedy  
    Style: Limelight  
    Genre: Drama, Romance  
    Episodes: 8 (ongoing)  
    Description: Two years ago your 3 year relationship ended suddenly. What happens when he comes back into your life unexpectedly while you're pursuing your dream career in physiotherapy? (CC)  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5944027944452096  
    IG: destinystradgedy  
    Additional notes: First 3 episodes are short, I was still getting used to directing length!
    
    Thanks so much and I will gladly read your story as well!

@southampton23 (cecca.episode on Instagram) replied

    Can't believe you wrote **Gang Affiliated**! (My guilty pleasure on episode xD)

To which @Vanessah replied

    Title: The boy who sees everything  
    Author: Vanessa H  
    Number of Episodes: 4  
    Additional notes: English isn't my first language and this is my first story ever
    
    I will check out your story!
    
    episodeinteractive.com
    
    ### The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The boy who sees everything
    
    Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

Then @Mzking said

    @bethanyk14 So I just finished my update and correct the minor errors. Because there was only one chapter read I can assure you it's more to the story, and the scaling was hard for one chapter read. The cover has been updated. I do thank you, for one thing, the most; I've tried so hard to find someone to do a cover for me and couldn't. After the critique I received, I learned how to do it myself and is very proud of my story, and my cover. So thank you for giving it a try… I also read your story and it is really good, keep up the good work! I actually like it and will look out for more things you will publish in the future.

To which @Amberlyn (Amberlyn) replied

    Hey.  
    Title: Filling A Void  
    Author: Amber Thompson  
    Number of episodes: 3  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4742249652682752

After which, @therese (Therese  @ThereseStories / @ThereseOnEpisode) added

    Hi Bethany! If you have time, would love for you to check out my story. Thanks for your help! Will check out your story as well, always love to read new ones. 
    
    Title: Love Across Time  
    Author: @DCDarling / Therese  
    Number of Episodes: 7 episodes (on-going)  
    Summary: Become Princess Aurelia as she sets out on an epic journey across time and space. Discover love, awaken adventure, and conquer evil. Customize main characters.

So @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    lmao really??

After which, @Dmfan91 (She who has no name) added

    Title: Some Sort of Drama  
    Author: Myself  
    Number of Episodes: 5 so far  
    Additional notes: Just to let you know one of the characters speaks improper English so the grammatical errors are intentional.

To which @WinterMoon05 (Sapphire | She/her) replied

    Hi, please read my story and I'll check out yours. Here's my story, I hope you enjoy it~  
    ​​  
    Story Title: Rivals [Limelight]  
    Author Name: Winter05  
    Genre: Romance  
    Style: Limelight (in the title, lol)  
    Story Description: You are fighting to win your father's trust to be handed down the family business. That's pretty hard with your rival company's boss's hot son. Will you come out victorious?  
    Episodes Released: 4 (ongoing)  
    Link:  
    episodeinteractive.com
    
    ### The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Rivals [DISCONTINUED]
    
    Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!
    
    Thanks,  
    Winter <3

So @aminaaD (aminaaD) replied

    Heres my new story !
    
    Authors:Aminaa & Jayla  
    Story:Scarlett's Revenge  
    Style: Ink  
    Story Description:An assassin who was betrayed by her former gang members will stop at nothing to exact revenge with the help of a former assassin. But can they handle what's coming? CC*  
    Episodes: 3 (Ongoing)  
    Genre: Action with a splash of Romance  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6572130504933376  
    Instagram: @episode.aminaa.jay

After which, @diana13 (diana) added

    Hi my name is Diana  
    I have a story that you may like  
    
    
      
    Story: Haunted past  
    The author: Diana13  
    Style: Ink  
    Gener: Romance  
    Description: Lexa had a really bad past. Then she meet a guy who is really dangeruse…  
    Inastagram: @haunted_past.episode  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6524131016835072
    
    I write this story with my friends  
    i hope you will like it!!!

@LexiLu (Lexi) replied

    Awesome!  Do you have an epy insta so we can follow each other and I can find your story easier?  
    Here's my story btw:  
    Title: A Twist Of Faith  
    Author: Lexi Lu  
    Number of Episodes: 5 ongoing

To which @Julia_ph (Juliaepsd) replied

    Hey! Wanna introduce to you my story too!  
    Title: Until You Knocked On My Door  
    Author: Julia  
    Number of Episodes:5 ongoing  
    Additional info: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5789794969452544
    
    Thank you

@clarkies (clarkies) replied

    Title: Zartrensa: Hearts of War  
    Author: Clarkie  
    Number of Episodes: 4 (ongoing)  
    Additional notes: Let me know how you feel about the characters and overall plot

To which @mysoxlike2party (mysoxlike2party) replied

    It might be informative if you would post an update on what stories you are currently working on reviewing and what is on the waitlist.

To which @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    Okay

To which @KatieR.Writes (Katie R) replied

    Thanks for the feed back! I'm revamping my story so this will help a lot!

After which, @Merose (Meera) added

    **Story Name** : The girl who wasn't strong enough  
    **Author** : Meera  
    **Genre** : Romance (also Drama)  
    **Style** : INK  
    **Number of episodes** : 7 (continuing)  
    **Description** : When you've finally broken, will you survive the fracture or will you break even more? A inherited trait that you don't know you have, and everyone's out to get you because of it.
    
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4838570673307648
    
    Please tell what you think and if you have any suggestions or comments, and let me know in my fan mail. Thanks!

So @Jamie1 (Jamie) replied

    I would love for you to read my story and review it and I will read yours   
    Title: It's complicated  
    Author: Jamie  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional notes: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5903801203163136

Then @lisa.p (lisa.p) said

    Hello!   
    Title : I Can Do This ?!  
    Author : Lisa.p  
    Number of episodes: 7  
    Description: An absent father, ill mother and a secret has cause Violet's life to crumble but then she meets Jackson. Will her life take a turn for the better?  
    Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4780615129497600

@giamorina (Gia Morina) replied

    **Title:** Prominent Gift  
    **Author:** Gia Morina  
    **Number of Episodes:** 4  
    **Additional info:** Kidnapped at 16, Piper finally escapes after three years. She finds herself in the home of the soon to be Alpha King. What happens when her kidnappers come looking for her? How long can the Alpha King keep her safe?

So @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **Illegal Alien**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, **8** , 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Good, I didn't see any errors. But there were many words that were UPPERCASE. It's good to use once in a while, but it was used a lot.
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, **7** , 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Nice zooms. Sometimes characters talk without moving mouths. When screen pans over to Vance, he appears mid-pan. Other small errors, such as dad talking when he's not supposed to when a new scene starts. You should move background characters to make it more realistic.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, **7** , 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Beginning is a bit confusing. She changes emotions quickly, from happy to sad. She convinced her dad quickly. One second he was trying to call the police and then, he just let her unlock the observatory. First, dad says she is 17, then later, says 16. Interesting story and original idea.
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, **9** , 10  
    Reasoning: Good length. Good cliff hanger, but I kind of predicted that he wasn't human.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, **6** , 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: It's fine. Large cover is a bit boring as it's just a picture of space.
    
    Grade: **74%**

So @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **My Smartboy**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, **5** , 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Excessive use of yea. Get dress. Go get dress. Should be “dressed.” Cabinet is not where you store clothes. It's a dresser.
    
    Directing: 1, 2, **3** , 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Mom calls girl, she comes from same side and no pause in between. Layers when mom walks under girl. She should not have to walk there since was already standing there before. Layers again, walking under girl when leaving. Even more at house…
    
    Plot: 1, **2** , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Very confused, doesn't offer much, if scarlson@example.com.
    
    Length: **1** , 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: This is very short. No cliffhanger.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, **6** , 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Hard to see black text on dark navy background. Nice edit though on character.
    
    Score: **34%**

To which @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **The Art of the Deal**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, **2** , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Long text in bubble. Should space them out in different actions. H-O-T T, why is there another T? No period after sentence. Capitalize “I”.
    
    Directing: 1, 2, **3** , 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Show not tell. Don't tell her background story, show it. Speech bubbles used instead of thought bubbles. Walking to bed needs to be fixed. Spot directing on bed needs to be fixed.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, **4** , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: First she says give him a chance, then right after, says she wants to quickly go away. Use phone background instead of narration. Kind of cliche that she would meet the person that she met online right after.
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, **4** , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: A little bit short, doesn't really end with a cliffhanger.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, **3** , 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10  
    Reasoning: Background doesn't say much about the story, other than the two characters. Personally, I don't like the font, especially in black. The description has a spelling error. Should be “their” instead of “there.”
    
    Grade: **30%**

So @bethanyk14 (Annie) replied

    **The Most Powerful Scream**
    
    Grammar/Spelling: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, **9** , 10  
    Reasoning: I think I only saw one tiny error where one sentence didn't have a period at the end. Perfect!
    
    Directing: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, **9** , 10  
    Reasoning: Nice zooms. Nice overlay of notepad. The only thing to make it better would be to have background characters in hallways and such, but that's only if you want to be super extra. It's basically  
    perfect.
    
    Plot: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, **10**  
    Reasoning: I love this plot! It's nice and original, and very interesting.
    
    Length: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, **8** , 9, 10  
    Reasoning: It's very long, and introduces the characters nicely. However, I think it would be better to leave on a cliffhanger, to ensure the reader continues.
    
    Cover: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, **8** , 9, 10  
    Reasoning: I like the covers! Especially the character edits.
    
    Grade: **88%**

@Cricket_Master (Mistress Cricket) replied

    Title: _The Quest_ (Classic) COMPLETE  
    Author: Cricket Master  
    Number of Chapters: 3  
    Additional Notes: This is my first published story.

So @mysoxlike2party (mysoxlike2party) replied

    Thanks for the quick review. I noticed you knocked off two points for a stylistic decision that does not impair grammar or spelling, NOT bashing your review at all, as I welcome and agree with MOST of your points. (Notice anything… lol jk jk.) Keep in mind writers benefit from holistic and objective feedback. Thanks for your dedication to helping others improve! (And before you say it, in case you're thinking it… yes, I am aware reviews are a matter of opinion. Happy reading!)

After which, @Tuva (Tuva) added

    Hey Bethnay, I would love if you gave me some feedback!
    
    Title: No-body  
    Author: Tuva  
    Number of Episodes: 12  
    Style: Limelight  
    Genre: Romance

So @CarllieS (CarllieS) replied

    Title: The Runaway  
    Author: Carllies  
    Number of Episodes: 22

So @cateyedgoddess (Cat) replied

    Thank you so much!!!

After which, @Gracex (Grace ) added

    Brutal! Thanks though - whether good or bad it's good to have. Ive just amended it as much as I can, so it's not completely shocking!

To which @Shantastic1999 (IG: @shantastic1999_episode) replied

    Hi! Is it possible to review 3 stories? These are my 3:
    
    Title: Revenge Is Best Served With…  
    Author: shantastic1999  
    Number of episodes: 3  
    Additional info: this is my 2nd story
    
    —————————————————————
    
    Title: Human?  
    Author: shantastic1999  
    Number of episodes: 12  
    Additional info: this is my 1st story
    
    —————————————————————
    
    Title: Just for Him [EPISODE 1 & 2 ONLY]  
    Author: shantastic1999  
    Number of episodes : 3 published, but only episode 1 is ready to read  
    Additional info: this is my 3rd story

So @B_Sydney (B_Sydney) replied

    Title: Safe  
    Author: B_Sydney  
    Number of Episodes: 8  
    Additional notes: I love how you review! Very honest and you are committed to doing them. So I hope you are able to do mine.
    
    Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4781662058708992

After which, @baelogical (baelogical) added

    Title: Gone Rogue  
    Author: Soph   
    Genre: Drama  
    Episodes: 3  
    Description: What will happen when Rose, better known as “Rogue” : undefeated bare-knuckle boxer at The Bloody Knuckle for the past three years, crosses paths with the dangerous new owners?  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5336737542569984  
    Instagram: @sophy.episode  
    Style: Ink  
    
    
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After which, @Alphan (Alphan) added

    Hey everyone!
    
    I'd like to promote my story called Upside Down here.  
    Below you can find the information you need to try it out.
    
    Author: **Alphan**  
    Story Title: **Upside Down**  
    No of episodes: **14 (I update every week)**  
    Genre: **Romance, Drama, Mystery**  
    Style: **INK**  
    Story Description: **June escaped her previous life. Will she meet people who will love her or will her old enemies destroy her again?**  
    Story Link: **http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6390501417418752**  
    Instagram: **alphan.episode**  
    Additional notes: **is it possible to message me regarding this on IG?**
    
    Please make sure to **follow me on Instagram** to contact me or for sneak peeks of the story!
    
    I'm up for **read for reads** as well, contact me on Instagram for that, please!

@mmLunixmm (Lunix) replied

    Thank you for the honesty and will take this feedback serious to improve.

@lovelymaddie (lovelymaddie) replied

    Title: Love Quest  
    Author: Katie and Maddie  
    Genre: Romance  
    Style: Ink  
    Episodes: 7 ongoing  
    Description: After a tough breakup, you are on a quest to find love again. But, is being on a TV show a real way to find love?  
    **Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5416940223594496**  
    Instagram: @thetalk_maddie and @kt_episode

@K_Artist2001 (K_Artist2001) replied

    Title: H&V: Our Story  
    Author: Ki_Writes  
    Number of Episodes: 3(ongoing)  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504
    
    Thank you for doing this

Then @_Ellynnn (_Ellynnn) said

    Check out my stories too!
    
    Story 1:  
    Title: The Unexpected Magic  
    Author: Ellyn  
    Description: Adelynn never have thought that her life will change forever after she found out that her mother was murdered…  
    Episode: 13 (Ongoing)  
    Genre: Fantasy  
    Style: Ink  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4914722346500096
    
    Story 2:  
    Title: The One Sided Love  
    Author: Ellyn  
    Description: Evelyn just started her college life. What will happen when she falls for one of her classmates?  
    Episode: 3 (Ongoing)  
    Genre: Romance  
    Style: Ink  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5965680263954432

To which @Danielle_Cassidy (Danielle Cassidy) replied

    Hello! I'd love do **_read for read_**! <3 And I'd also love to know **your opinion** on my story! <3
    
    Here's my story details  <3
    
    **Story title:** Hollywood Bliss  
    **Author:** Danielle Cassidy  
    **Genre:** Romance (also a comedy)  
    **Style:** INK  
    **Episodes:** 4 (ongoing, 5 comming out soon!)  
    **Story description:** Sandy's life turns wild when she becomes MC in a musical and her co-star is the most popular bad boy in Hollywood.  
    **Story Link:** http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5341853550510080
    
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    You can also DM me on **instagram:** @daniellecassidy.episode

@luna3 (Hannah) replied

    Love the pictures of covers up above!

Then @_hxxd (hxxd) said

    **NAME:** Mr Bad Boy and Mrs Bad Girl  
    **DESCRIPTION:** Your the most powerful gang leader. Your going on an undercover mission to kill your BIGGEST rival. Will love get in your way? (Character Customisation)  
    **CHAPTERS:** 3 and to be continued  
    **GENRE:** Action  
    **STYLE:** Ink  
    **LINK:** http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6255237127602176

@MysteryMaker (Mystery Maker) replied

    Title: Mr Bond's Murder  
    Author: Mystery Maker  
    Number of Episodes: 5 are OUT!!(More coming soon)  
    Genre: thriller (with contents of comedy and mystery)  
    Description:A snowy night, A few clues and a murder investigation, where noone is reliable to be trusted…
    
    for your ease,here's a link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6705429627011072  
    Hope you like it

Then @Akanksha (Akanksha S.) said

    Title: Mad Love  
    Genre: Romance/Mystery  
    Author: Akanksha S.  
    Style: Ink  
    Episodes: 8 (ongoing)  
    Description: One day, you wake up and your mom is gone. Will you be able to find her in time and also true love along the way?
    
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4736906335879168
    
    So if you're interested in reading a story with the perfect combo: romance and mystery, check out my story Mad Love! I would appreciate it a lot! Thanks

So @A.V (A.V.) replied

    **Title** : The College Diaries  
    **Author** : A.V.  
    **Number of Episodes** : 10 (on going)  
    **Additional notes** : This is my first story and I have edited the first episodes so many times  I'd like to see what you think of my story and possible suggestions you have for it  I'll make sure I check out your story and I will PM you when I do  thank you for your time.

After which, @Navya (JellyMoon) added

    Would you like to read my story? 
    
    **Title: Enagaged **  
    **Author: Navya Sallan**  
    **Genere: Comedy **  
    **Style: Ink**  
    **My Instagram: navya.episode**  
    **Link:** https://www.instagram.com/navya.episode/
    
    **Episodes: episode 6 is OUT!**
    
    **Description: what happens when you suddenly find out that you are engaged to a hot stranger in America and you are forced to move to America with him!!!**
    
    **Link:** http://episodeinteractive.com/s/58103226482032641
    
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@Ltxo replied

    Hi! I would appreciate an honest review <3
    
    Form: Ink  
    Username: ltxo  
    Author Name: Lara  
    Story Title: From Girly to Manly  
    Genre: Romance/Fantasy/Adventure  
    Description: Ever since the new queen's reign the kingdom has been divided. There is a barrier between men and women. What happens if you have to pretend to be a boy, but then start to fall for the guy you deceived? [CC]  
    Published: Yes, Episode 6 so far
    
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5238987157798912
    
    Thank you!! Btw, thank you for the cover <3

To which @Sweet_Stories (Sweet Stories) replied

    Title: **H & V: In Too Deep**  
    Author: Sweet Stories  
    Number of Episodes: 3 (4 on the way)  
    Additional notes: This is my first contest piece so I would really appreciate the feed back <3  
    **Instagram:** @_sweetstories
    
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@Sweet_Stories (Sweet Stories) replied

    4 has now been released:)

Then @Mina said

    Title: Scandalous  
    Author: Mina  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Description: After the murder of her best friend, Catalina uncovers secrets that make her question everything she thought she knew, and clues that could lead her to the killer before they strike again.  
    Additional notes: Tap slowly as I use a lot of slow panning and zooming!
    
    Thank you so much (:

So @Freakish (Oli Deshae ) replied

    Freakish  
    1.Title: Freakish  
    2.Author: Oli Deshae  
    3\. Genre: Romance  
    4.Story style: Ink  
    5.Story summary: Becoming friends with the new boy is an interesting task as he gets to know your freakish personality.  
    6.Link to the app: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4548827255406592  
    7.Social media: Instagram - freakish._.trash
    
    I hope you decide to read my story. I am a new writer and I would appreciate tips.

@Sandra_S (Sandra S) replied

    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6285203102629888 read and tell me if you liked my story   
    Title: Inner Madness  
    Genre: Comedy  
    Please tell me your opinion   
    If you going to read my story then please reply with yours and I will read yours story aswell

To which @its.lelani (Leilani) replied

    Title: What is Love?  
    Author: Lelani  
    Number of Episodes: 4  
    Additional notes: It's my first story I hope you enjoy it!  
    episodeinteractive.com
    
    ### The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: What is Love?
    
    Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

@feck.b (feck.b) replied

    This is my first story I published and these are the details for it, I hope you guys could read it.  
    I only published 6 episodes, but I hope you like them so far if you give it a read.  
    Title: SHANKED!  
    Author: feck.b  
    Category: action/adventure  
    Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5563581969596416Story  
    cover:  
    
    
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    This story also uses East London slang.  
    IG: feck.b

So @abwritez (ab) replied

    Title : Distractors  
    Author ; Little AB  
    Number of episodes ; 5  
    Additional notes ; none

So @episodecray (You Can Call Me Cray) replied

    Hello there, @bethanyk14!
    
    Title: Your Secret Admirer  
    Author: @EpisodeCray  
    Number of Episodes: 6  
    Additional Notes: What happens when Natalia's secret love letter ends up in the hands of the wrong boy? Will she fall in love or will everything fall apart?  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4654341800198144
    
    Thank you for taking time off to review, I really appreciate it. I will be sure to check out Gang Affiliated!
    
    X

After which, @S.A (Shay Cal) added

    Hallo! Here is my story for you all to read! Feedback is always appreciated!
    
    Title: H & V: Neighborhood Heroes  
    Author: Shay Cal  
    Episodes: 3 (ongoing)  
    Genre: Action|Comedy|  
    Style: Limelight  
    Description: Meet your “friendly neighborhood” superheroes. And some villains who may or may not win the battle.  
    Instagram: shaythewriter  
    
    
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    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5736960958529536
    
    Hope you enjoy.

Then @ab.creates (Aimee Toze) said

    Just published my new story ‘Hiding the Truth' by @ab.creates.  
    Description- Scarlett struggles with depression due to her horrendeous childhood, but puts on a brave face. Will her new roommate Bailey, & best friend Didi be able to break her walls?  
    I would love it if people would check it out and give me some feedback!  
    episodeinteractive.com
    
    ### The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Hiding The Truth (ON HOLD)
    
    Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

So @shewrites.episode replied

    My first ever story, please feel free to check it out! 
    
    Title- The art of seduction  
    Author- Chy.dillon  
    Genre- Romance but will be abit of action  
    description- You mange to bag yourself an interview at the hottest night club around vixen, how wil it go? among the rich and the famous who has their eyes on you?  
    nothing is what it seems.  
    story link_ http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630728767930368
    
    I Would apprieciate it so much if you could read my story and leave me any form of feedback!

@Kayluss (Kayluss) replied

    Hi! This is my first story!
    
    Title: Beautiful Boy  
    Short Description: It is about a girl who is forced to switch places with her brother at a summer camp after an accident. She faces falling in love, being blackmailed, under attack, and hiding her secret identity.  
    Style: Ink  
    Genre: Romance, Drama  
    Episodes: 5 - trying to do weekly episodes  
    Instagram: @kayluss  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6543833674940416

After which, @Victoria_Smith (Author of Unexpected Love. Insta: @victoria_smith_episode ) added

    Hi!  
    This's my FIRST story!  
    Title: Unexpected Love  
    Author: Victoria_Smith  
    Episodes: 7 (more episodes coming)  
    Genre: Romance  
    Description: Victoria disappointed in love and she completely changed. Is she find love again or she share a bed with strangers?  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/52176811965808641  
    Insta: victoria_smith_episode
    
    Thank you for your time!

So @CD_Erugo (C.D Erugo ❤️) replied

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    **Story Name:** Cursed (H&V)  
    **Description:** You are Zara. A vampire princess scarlson@example.com. You thirst for vampire blood. You have enemies who want you dead. You are the hero of your country. Will you be able to save it?  
    **Genre:** Fantasy, Drama, Romance  
    **Style:** Limelight  
    **Status:** Ongoing
    
    **Read for Read (first episode only, I will continue to read if I like storyy. You can do the same if you like story)**  
    **If you want to you can give review**  
    **Also please rate it out of 10**  
    **Not a cliche vampire story.**
    
    **Optional to read below. But it will inform more on my story.**
    
    Quick Description **(Not in episode bio)** : There was a banquet held once a year in the Vampire Country called The Banquet of Vampire Pride, 300 years before your arrival. The Vampire King sent out an army to capture a family of witches (which were rare to find) to drink their blood. But the army missed one person. The youngest child of the witch family. Devastated at their death. This young witch now orphaned spent 300 years training for revenge. Only to wait until your birth, to truly get revenge. Cursing so you so you can only drink a Vampire's blood. Traitors plot to overthrow the King causing the Battle of Royals to draw near. There's death, there's tragedy, there's love, friendship and trust.
    
    ## **Pointers**
    
    **Battle of Royals:** Is when the King dies, all the children of the King are entitled to the throne. All they have to do to get it. Is enter the Battle of Royals and fight to the death or forfeit.  
    **Witches:** You might be like. How did the witch live so long? Everything can live until very very old except humans. They have a 100 year life span. All others in this story can live long.

@diana13 (diana) replied

    Hi, my name is Diana  
    Title: Haunted past  
    Author: Diana13  
    Genre:Romance and Drama  
    Style:Ink  
    Description: Lexa had a bad childhood, but what will happen when she meet a strange man…  
    Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6524131016835072  
    This is my firs story and I hope you will like it!!!

To which @PrincessMe (Barbara ) replied

    Here is my story, hope you will like it ))  
    Title: Breaking Silence  
    Author: Barbara Otis  
    Genre: Drama, Romance  
    Description: After running away from life with brother, Sherry gets in more mess. Family secrets, old enemies and passions with ruthless and dangerous mafia. Do this all tied up?  
    Number of episodes: 5 (ongoing)

After which, @BreeAmbers (BreeAmbers) added

    Title: H & V: Toxic Perfection  
    Author: Bree Ambers  
    Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)  
    Additional notes: I'll look for your story and start reading it!

@abrahammm15021 (Abraham Monavari) replied

    Tittle: Autofocus.  
    Author: Abraham Monavari  
    Number of episodes: 3  
    Additional Notes :  
    (Description)  
    You are a normal girl,you wanna be a photographer and everything is fine until one day you'll be able to change time.

To which @Kuen (Jojo ) replied

    Title ~ROSE  
    Author ~ Jojo  
    Number of episode ~ 11 (on going)  
    Additional note~  
    Style ~ Ink Genre~ Romance  
    Description ~Already struggling with her past, Rose falls into some more drama and romance mystery. What adventures and heartbreak and surprises will she face next?  
    Link~ http// episodeinteractive.com/s/5164972039208960  
    Instagram ~ @Fongjoline  
    I'll read your story as well, don't worry   
    Thanks in advance

So @Alex_Af (Alex Af) replied

    Hi, Bethany!
    
    Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!
    
    If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, it will keep you hooked 
    
    My story details:
    
    **Name of story** : H & V: Fate  
    **Author** : Alex Af  
    **Genre** : Thriller  
    **Episodes** : 4 (completed)  
    **Summary of story** : Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.  
    **Link to story** : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728  
    **Instagram** : @episode.alex.af
    
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Then @thesktales (SK Tales) said

    Hi Bethany! Here's my H & V story 
    
    Title: **H & V: Blurred Lines**  
    Author: SK Tales  
    Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
    
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    Mars Piper lands her dream job at HERO - the organisation protecting the world from Deviants with ‘superhuman' abilities.
    
    _Little does she know **she's** one of them_! [CC]
    
    **Link to read**
    
    Enjoy  !!

@boluawoll (aliyah ezeh) replied

    Modern Family  
    Bolu A.  
    3 episodes  
    Instagram is @bolu.writes

After which, @Zayen (Zayen Ng) added

    Hey there! I would like to get a review!
    
    Title: H & V: Shadows of My Past  
    Author: Zayen Ng  
    Number of Episodes: 3 (Ongoing)  
    Additional notes: This is my first contest entry and I would love to get some feedback on it

To which @Littlefeets (Brooke) replied

    I actually have 5 stories. You don't have to read all of them, but any feedback on any of them would be great. I will list all of them on here.  
    I recommend tapping slowly on my stories because if you tap too fast it will mess up the movement/animation sometimes.
    
    Title: No Longer An Average Teenager  
    Author: Brooke  
    Number of Episodes: 9  
    Additional Notes: This story is complete, and I am in the process of writing a sequel. It is a story about vampires, but it is different from most. When I wrote this story I used the mobile creator on the app, at the time there was no ability to add choices. This was my first story on episode.
    
    Title: Girls of Earth  
    Author: Brooke  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional Notes: The Mobile Creator didn't allow choices at the time.
    
    Title: It All Started With A Dream  
    Author: Brooke  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional Notes: The mobile creator didn't allow choices at the time.
    
    Title: Haunted: The Town Legend  
    Author: Brooke  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional Notes: The mobile creator didn't allow choices at the time
    
    Title: Star Power: Everything Changes  
    Author: Brooke  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional Notes: The mobile creator had the ability to add choices at this point.

After which, @Littlefeets (Brooke) added

    Wow! Your story cover looks amazing!

Then @Avis (Just writing) said

    Hi I would love it if you check out my story which is called Geek.  
    I have only 36 reading views and everytime I launch my story on my episode I get only few like and no one seems to answer my polls… So I was wondering if theres something wrong with my story that makes it not interesting. Please rate my story and help me out   
    P.S also, please be really honest with me on my story whether it good or terrible.
    
    Story: Geek  
    Author: Avis Pond  
    Instagram: @avispond.episode_foodlover

After which, @AMar (Alexandra Mar) added

    Hi there!  
    I'd love if you could review my story. I promise I will defientely read at least 3 chapter of your story   
    Here are the details of mine:  
    **Title:** H & V: Lie to me  
    **Author:** Alexandra Mar  
    **Genre:** Mystery/Drama with romantic subplots  
    **Description:** After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released.But wait, what's that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.  
    **Link:** http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664

After which, @joqueena (Toldby_Queeen) added

    Title: Art of Desire  
    Author: Joqueena  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Additional notes: summary A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them  
    questions comments concerns or advise on my new stories anything will help thank you

So @K_Artist2001 (K_Artist2001) replied

    Title: H&V: Our Story  
    Author: Ki_Writes  
    Number of Episodes: 3  
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504

After which, @PaulaSCM added

    Hello, I published my new story  
    If you read it I read yours   
    **_Author:_** Paula Sánchez-Cid  
    **_Story title:_** Mafia is my second name CC  
    **_Genre:_** Romance, Drama  
    **_Style:_** INK  
    **_Story description:_** This story is about a girl that suffer a lot, and didn't believe in love, but Alex went into her life and she starts to feel happy and believe in love, but everything has problems…  
    **_Hope you like it_**   
    
    
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So @Ryan (Ryan) replied

    Closing due to one month of inactivity

So @Ryan (Ryan) replied

    


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