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 OpenCSG stands for Converged resources, Software refined, and Generative LM. The 'C' represents Converged resources, indicating the integration and full utilization of hybrid resources. The 'S' stands for Software refined, signifying software that is refined by large models. The 'G' represents Generative LM, which denotes widespread, inclusive, and democratized generative large models.
 
-The vision of OpenCSG is to empower every industry, every company, and every individual to own their models. We adhere to the principles of openness and open source, making the large model software stack of OpenCSG available to the community. We welcome everyone to use, feedback, and collaborative contribute.
+The vision of OpenCSG is to empower every industry, every company, and every individual to own their models. We adhere to the principles of openness and open source, making the large model software stack of OpenCSG available to the community. We welcome everyone to use, send feedback, and contribute collaboratively.
 
 
 
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 ## Model Description
 
 CodeLlama is a collection of pretrained and fine-tuned generative text models from Llama2, which ranges in scale from 7 billion to 34 billion parameters.
-Based on CodeLlama, opencsg-CodeLlama-v0.1 is a series of fintuned models througth full-paramters fine-tuning method. 
+Based on CodeLlama, opencsg-CodeLlama-v0.1 is a series of models fintuned througth full-paramters fine-tuning method. 
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 This is the repository for the base 7B version finetuned based on [CodeLlama-7b-hf](https://huggingface.co/codellama/CodeLlama-7b-hf). 
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 ## Model Eval
 
-HumanEval is the commonest code generation benchmark to evaluate the performance of models, especially on the the compeltion of code exercise cases.
-Somehow, model evaluation is a kind of metaphysics. Different models are sensitive to different decoding methods, paramters and instructions.
-It is impratical for us to manually set specific configuration for each fine-tuned model, because a real LLM should master the universal capability despite the parameters manipulated by users.
+HumanEval is the most common code generation benchmark for evaluating model performance, especially on the compeltion of code exercise cases.
+Model evaluation is, to some extent, a metaphysics. Different models have different sensitivities to decoding methods, parameters and instructions.
+It is impratical for us to manually set specific configurations for each fine-tuned model, because a real LLM should master general capabilities despite the parameters being manipulated by users.
 
-Thus, OpenCSG strained our brains to provide a relatively fair method to compare the fine-tuned models on HumanEval benchmark.
-To simplify the comparison, we chosed the Pass@1 metric on python language, but our finetuning dataset includes samples in multi language.
+Therefore, OpenCSG racked their brains to provide a relatively fair method to compare the fine-tuned models on the HumanEval benchmark.
+To simplify the comparison, we chosed the Pass@1 metric for the Python language, but our fine-tuning dataset includes samples in multiple languages.
 
-**For fair, we evaluated the fine-tuned and original codellama models only with the original cases' prompts, not including any other instruction else.**
+**For fairness, we evaluated the original and fine-tuned CodeLlama models based only on the prompts from the original cases, without including any other instructions.**
 
-**Otherwise, we use greedy decoding method for each model during the evaluation.**
+**Otherwise, we use the greedy decoding method for each model during evaluation.**
 
 | Model     | HumanEval python pass@1                                                 |
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 | opencsg-CodeLlama-34b-v0.1(4k)| **48.8%** |
 
 **TODO**
-- we will provide much more benchmark scores on fine-tuned models in future.
-- we will provide different practical problems to evaluate the performance of fine-tuned models in the field of software engineering.
+- We will provide more benchmark scores on fine-tuned models in the future.
+- We will provide different practical problems to evaluate the performance of fine-tuned models in the field of software engineering.