hands of another family? not sure if this works either. i might have to write the scene with the original owners and see how that goes.
part of my problem is that i’m still near the start of the story and i’m 35000 words in! a lot of this will be cut in order to make things move along faster and a lot will be added to give flesh and color to my world. but that’s for december. now, it’s time to get the bare bones down and make other decisions later. 