but dude, the characters are indeed young and it should be juvenile! son in their time meant servant of god. you can even turn your very inability to speak into a prayer. in my mind a clearer picture appears. 5-5 was probably a fair result in the end. maybe add a handful of used coffee grounds to rain water for half an hour then add the seaweed mix, swish it all around and pour gently over the soil. let's just say i'm not a nail biter. "what would i have done if you'd fallen?" 