and cannot let them go. they can also be great shiver moments.
in my own writing i am working harder to use this aspect because i feel like it is so powerful. when i thought back to writing my first book, the royal spy, two scenes kept coming to mind. two scenes made the project have to work. one was the mud fight scene and the other the sword fight in the tower with lightning flashing. the first scene is just a fun one that creates happy emotions but the second is a shiver moment. what was missing in the first was the braiding. the layers that make a shiver moment 