not long before, when she had been laid up for a day, he had read her out a ghost story and made toast for her at the fire. do these words help guide your reader along? i see it every night on television when white police officers shoot black men and boys, over and over, night after night. they usually include flash on where the camera fires the flash whenever the exposure system decides it is necessary. and that is what you are doing. thank you also for the good description and fast delivery. 