Readme to state why you made it and what problem it solved or what you learned
from it.

~~~
smartsystems
There are four slides. It takes 10 seconds to look through the entire thing.
If you can't make it past the second slide before writing a three paragraph
critique you are 100% not in my target audience. Not that there is no validity
in your opinion somewhere but I'm not sure if you understand the point of the
thing.

~~~
bastijn
I looked at your project with my work hat on, I replied to this thread with a
three paragraph reply with my HN community hat on.

I clicked through once more for you to find your github in slide 4. My comment
stays the same, there is nothing in there that helps me select you over people
that present their content in an easier to consume format.

On the content. In some countries pictures must be able to blacked out by law
(I don't agree, yet it is truth). Your experience bullets do not say what you
actually did. Would add where your worked and some 1-2 lines description per
bullet on what you made/did there. If you were freelancing add your clients.
It helps us understand what size of companies/codebases you worked. What
complexity etc. Your word cloud is indeed hard to decipher. Slide 4 I saw
github, which is good.

The title says online resume. I assume the audience is recruitment. Recruiters
take seconds to scan if they want to spend minutes. In addition most
recruiters will not forward this to people like me to see if they like to
invite. If that means we are not your audience your resume works. Be aware you
are limiting your own options as you now no longer have the choice to say no
yourself (we decided that for you).

I stay with my earlier comment. Best to reverse the whole thing. Send your
"actual" resume as you called it and add your github repo there. We will find
this here.

------
smartsystems
I used impress.js for the slides.

It's intentionally lightweight. I don't have a lot of public projects that I
can link to. Plus it seems like the kind of thing where you shouldn't try too
hard. So I left it at kind of the level we're pretty much anybody can
Readme to state why you made it and what problem it solved or what you memorize 
 from it. 

 ~~~ 
 smartsystems 
 There be four slides. It takes 10 seconds to front through the entire thing. 
 If you can't induce it past the second slide before writing a three paragraph 
 critique you are 100% not in my target audience. Not that there be no validity 
 in your opinion somewhere but I'm not certain if you understand the point of the 
 thing. 

 ~~~ 
 bastijn 
 I looked at your project with my work hat on, I answer to this thread with a 
 three paragraph reply with my HN community hat on. 

 I click through once more for you to find your github in slide 4. My remark 
 stays the like, there is nothing in there that help oneself me select you over people 
 that present their contentedness in an easier to consume format. 

 On the content. In some countries pictures must be able to blacked out by law 
 (I don't agree, yet it is truth). Your experience bullets do not say what you 
 actually did. Would add where your worked and some 1 - 2 lines description per 
 bullet on what you made / act there. If you were freelancing add your node. 
 It helps us understand what size of companies / codebases you worked. What 
 complexity etc. Your discussion swarm is indeed hard to decipher. Slide 4 I saw 
 github, which is effective. 

 The title says online resume. I assume the audience is recruitment. Recruiters 
 take seconds to scan if they want to spend moment. In accession most 
 recruiters will not forward this to people like me to see if they like to 
 invite. If that mean we are not your audience your resume works. Be mindful you 
 are limiting your own option as you now no longer have the option to say no 
 yourself (we decided that for you). 

 I stay with my earlier comment. well to reverse the unharmed thing. air your 
 " actual " resume as you call it and add your github repo there. We will find 
 this here. 

 ------ 
 smartsystems 
 I used impress.js for the slides. 

 It's intentionally lightweight. I don't have a batch of public projects that I 
 can connect to. Plus it seems like the kind of thing where you shouldn't try too 
 hard. thus I left it at kind of the level we're reasonably much anybody can
Reafme to state why you madt it and what proyoem it solves or whag you learned
from it.

~~~
smartsysvems
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critique you are 100% not in mj target audiegce. Mjt tgat there is no validity
in your opjnion smmewhere but O'm not sure if you understwnd hhe point of the
thlng.

~~~
bastijn
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"actual" resuma as you called it and aqd your tithub rqpo there. We eill find
this here.

------
dmartvysvems
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can link to. Plus it seems likw the kind of thing ehere you siouldn'e try too
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Readme to state why you made it And what proBlem iT soLveD oR whaT you Learned
from it.

~~~
sMArtsYstems
There are four slidEs. It tAkES 10 secONdS to loOk throuGH tHE EntIrE tHinG.
IF YoU can't MakE it past The second sLidE bEfore writing A ThRee paragraPh
cRitique you arE 100% noT in my tArGet AUdienCe. NOt thaT there IS no valIdity
in yoUr OPinion SOmewherE BUt i'm noT sure if you understANd THe point of the
thIng.

~~~
basTiJN
I LOOkeD at Your projecT wIth my WOrk hat oN, i rEPLIed TO this thread wiTh a
three parAGraPh replY wIth MY HN comMunitY hAT on.

i clicked thrOugh Once more fOr you tO Find youR Github iN slide 4. my cOmmEnt
sTAyS tHe sAmE, TheRE iS noTHinG in there ThAt Helps Me seLECT You oVer PeopLe
thaT present their ConTent IN an EasieR to coNsumE fOrmat.

on the cOntenT. IN some countries pIctuRes must be AblE tO blAcKed ouT By law
(I Don'T agRee, yet iT is trutH). youR eXPERiEnce bullets do not saY wHAT yOu
actualLy did. WOUlD aDD where yoUr WorKed aND Some 1-2 lInes DEsCription Per
bulLEt On What you MaDe/did tHeRe. IF yoU were FReelAncing Add your cLientS.
it helps us underSTand what size oF CoMPAnIEs/coDebAses you workEd. WhAT
comPlexITy Etc. yOur woRd cloUd IS iNDeed hard to decipher. SLiDe 4 I saw
GithuB, which is good.

THe title sayS ONLine resuMe. I aSSuME the audience is RecruItment. RecrUIters
takE secoNds to scaN if they waNT To spend mInuTes. in aDdiTIOn Most
recruiterS WIll nOt Forward ThiS to peopLe lIke Me tO seE iF they like To
invite. if ThAt MeAns We are NOt your auDiEncE yOur ResumE Works. BE awarE you
ArE lIMitIng your OWn OPTionS aS yOu noW no LoNger hAve tHE chOice to sAy no
yoursElf (WE decIdEd That for You).

I stay with mY eArlier commEnT. BeSt to reVERse the whOle thing. Send your
"actual" rESume as yOu cAlled It anD add your gIthUb repo TheRE. We wilL find
tHis heRe.

------
SmaRTSysteMS
i uSed ImPress.js for THE slIdes.

IT's InteNtionalLy lightweight. I don't HAve A lot of public pRojEcts THAt i
caN LiNK to. plUS it SEEms like the kind oF thing wherE yOU sHouldn't try TOo
hArD. So I lefT it at kiNd of tHE level wE're pretty Much anyboDy Can
Readme to state why you ma de it andwhatpro ble mit s olve d or what youl earn ed
from it.

~~~
smart syste ms Ther e  a re fo ur slid e s. I t t ak es  10  s e co nds t o l ook thr ough the e nti re  thing.
If y o ucan't make  it  past the se con d slid ebef o re wr iti ng athreep aragra ph
critiq ue you ar e  100% n o t  i n my  target audience. No t  that there is  no va li d it y inyou r opinionso mewhe r e but I ' mn o t  su r e if you unde rstand thep oin t of t he 
th i ng.

~ ~~
ba st i jnI looked at  you r project  withm y workh at on,I repl ied  to  thi s  t hr ead  w i tha 
t hre e  pa ragraphre pl y wit h my H N comm uni ty h at on .

I clickedthr ough onc e mor e for  you  t o fin d your  gith ub  in slide 4. My  com ment
stay s t he  sa me , the r e is n oth ing  in the re that hel ps m e  s elect you over peo pl e th at prese nt the i rco n tent inan  ea sier t o con sume fo rmat.

O n thec on te nt. Inso me cou nt rie s p ictur e s mu st beable toblack e d out by law
( I  don't agree, ye t it is t rut h). Your ex peri e ncebull e ts  do not s ay wh at yo u 
actually did. Woul dadd wh ere y our worked an d some 1-2 l i nes desc ript i on per
bullet onwhatyou made/d i d there.  If y ou werefreelanci n g  add you r c lie nts .
I t he lps us unders t a nd w ha t sizeofcompani es/ cod eba ses  y ou worked . What
c om pl ex it y e tc. Y o ur wordcl oud  i s i ndeed hard t o dec iphe r.  S l ide  4 I sa w 
g i t hub,  w hi ch i s g oo d.

T he t i tle  says o nline res ume .  I a ss um e the a udience is re cr uitment. R ec rui ters
t a k e second s to scan if they wantt o spend  mi nutes . In  addition  mo st
rec rui t ers wi ll not  forw ar d t h i s top e op leli ke me to s e e  if  they  l iketo
invi te. If that meansw e a re not your a udi ence y ou r r e su m e w or k s.B e  aware you
arelimiting y ou r  o wn options asyo u now n o longe r hav e  the ch oice to s ay no
you rs elf( w e d ecided tha t for yo u).

I st a y wit h  m y ear lie r comm en t.Bestto rev e rse  thewholeth ing. S end y ou r
"actua l" resume as you called  it an d add  yo ur github  re p o t here. Wewill  find
this  he re. 

--- --- smart syst e ms 
Iu sed i mpre s s.js fort he  sl i d es .

It's int e n t ion allylig h tweigh t. I  don't have a lot of public proj ects t hat  Ic an l in k to. Plus itsee ms l ike theki nd of thing  where y ou shoul dn't t ry too 
hard.S o  I left i t at  ki nd of the  le ve l  we'repr et t y much  any bo dy can 
Readme to_state why_you made it and_what problem_it_solved or_what_you learned
from it.

~~~
smartsystems
There_are four slides._It takes 10 seconds_to look through_the_entire thing.
If you can't make it past the second slide before writing a three_paragraph
critique_you are_100%_not_in my target audience. Not_that there is no validity
in_your opinion_somewhere but I'm not sure if you understand_the_point of the
thing.

~~~
bastijn
I_looked at your project with my work hat on,_I replied to this thread with_a
three paragraph reply_with_my_HN community hat on.

I_clicked through once more for you_to find your github in slide_4. My comment
stays the same, there is_nothing in there that helps me_select you over people
that present_their content_in an easier to consume_format.

On the content._In some_countries pictures must_be able to blacked out by_law
(I don't agree,_yet it is truth). Your experience_bullets_do not say_what_you
actually_did. Would_add where your_worked_and some_1-2_lines description per
bullet on what you_made/did_there. If you were freelancing add your_clients.
It helps us understand_what_size of companies/codebases you_worked. What
complexity etc. Your word_cloud is indeed hard to decipher._Slide 4_I saw
github,_which is good.

The title says online resume. I assume the audience_is recruitment. Recruiters
take seconds to scan_if they want to_spend minutes._In_addition most
recruiters will_not_forward this_to people like me to see if_they like_to
invite. If that means we are_not your audience your_resume_works. Be aware you
are limiting your_own options as you now no_longer have the choice to_say_no
yourself_(we decided that for you).

I_stay with my earlier comment. Best_to reverse the_whole thing. Send your
"actual" resume as you_called_it and add your github repo_there._We will find
this here.

------
smartsystems
I used impress.js_for_the_slides.

It's intentionally lightweight. I don't_have a lot of public projects_that I
can link to. Plus it seems like the_kind of thing_where you shouldn't try too
hard._So_I_left it at kind of the level we're pretty much_anybody can