#Sleep_s...](https://secure.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/wiki/Sleep#Sleep_stages))

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anon-e-moose
Your website needs to have a one sentence explanation of what it does, e.g.
measure sleep and wake you up when you're in a light sleep. You pretty much
have to read the FAQ to figure out that's what it does. Not saying this makes
it seem like a quack magnetic bracelet or something. Just a suggestion.

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spydertennis
We made the assumption that the average purchaser would not be interested in
details like what phase of sleep you are woken up in. That is why those
details are provided, but not prominently displayed.

Thank you for your suggestion though.

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reemrevnivek
The average purchaser is probably not interested in the details, but they are
most certainly interested in a sentence describing what it does.

All that I knew about it when I clicked the link and skimmed the page was: \-
They're ready \- I skipped some stuff about pre-orders \- I might not be able
to get one before Christmas \- When you make them, they're all arranged in a
big tray, are charcoal and light blue \- The manufacturing process somehow
involves baking and cutting.

I had to click in my url bar and type in "wakemate.com" before I got anything
useful. It's a fuzzy bracelet, it has something to do with waking you up and
making you feel better, a few platforms like iPhone, some video I don't have
time for, and I finally read "Wake up at the optimal time in your sleep
cycle."

That sentence should be the first thing I read.

~~~
colomon
I cannot upvote this enough, had the exact same experience.

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garbowza
I've been using WakeMate in beta for a couple months. As an engineer, I love
checking the sleep analytics and comparing tags to try to determine factors
that affect my sleep.

At first I was dubious that I'd be less groggy when waking up with the device,
but now I'm absolutely convinced. I even bring the WakeMate when I travel, to
ensure I wake up in a fresher state (which also revealed to me that my sleep
# Sleep_s... ](https://secure.wikimedia.org / wikipedia / en / wiki / Sleep#Sleep_stages) ) 

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 anon - e - moose 
 Your website needs to get a one conviction explanation of what it does, e.g. 
 measure sleep and inflame you up when you're in a light sleep. You reasonably much 
 have to read the FAQ to calculate out that's what it does. Not saying this take 
 it seem like a quack magnetic watchband or something. Just a suggestion. 

 ~~~ 
 spydertennis 
 We made the assumption that the average purchaser would not be interested in 
 detail like what phase of sleep you are woken up in. That is why those 
 details are put up, but not prominently displayed. 

 Thank you for your suggestion though. 

 ~~~ 
 reemrevnivek 
 The average purchaser is credibly not interested in the detail, but they are 
 most certainly interested in a conviction describing what it does. 

 All that I knew about it when I clicked the link and skimmed the page was: \- 
 They're ready \- I skipped some stuff about pre - orders \- I might not be able 
 to get one before Christmas \- When you make them, they're all arranged in a 
 big tray, are charcoal and light blue \- The fabrication procedure somehow 
 involves bake and cut. 

 I had to click in my url bar and type in " wakemate.com " before I got anything 
 useful. It's a fuzzy bracelet, it get something to do with waking you up and 
 making you feel effective, a few platforms like iPhone, some video I don't have 
 time for, and I ultimately read " wake up up at the optimal time in your sleep 
 cycle. " 

 That sentence should be the inaugural thing I read. 

 ~~~ 
 colomon 
 I cannot upvote this enough, had the accurate same experience. 

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 garbowza 
 I've been use WakeMate in beta for a couple months. As an engineer, I love 
 check the rest analytics and comparing tags to try to determine factors 
 that involve my sleep. 

 At foremost I was dubious that I'd be less groggy when inflame up with the device, 
 but now I'm absolutely convinced. I even bring the WakeMate when I travel, to 
 see I wake up in a freshman state (which also revealed to me that my rest
#Slefp_s...](https://secure.wikimedia.ovg/wikipedia/en/wikn/Wleep#Sneep_stzges))

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anon-d-moose
Your website needs to iave a ont sentence explanatkon of whwt it dows, e.j.
measure sleep ais wake nju ul wheu bou're in a lighj sleep. You [retty much
hava go read the FAQ to figure out that's wrat it cofs. Not saying jhis kwkes
jn weem like a quack magnetic brzcelet mr something. Kust a suggestion.

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spydertenjis
Wf made the assumptlon that thg avqeage purchasdr would not be intereated in
details like what phase uf slzep you are wikej up in. That is wry those
detalks are providrd, but not prokinxntlt displayed.

Thank you hor your suggestion jhough.

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reemsernivek
The average purxhqser hs psobacoy vot iitedested in the detaims, but they are
most certainly onevtested in a aentense describing what it does.

All that I knew abkut it when I clicked tye link and skimmed tje page wws: \-
They're ready \- I skipped some stuff about pre-orgers \- K mnnmt nur he able
to get one before Christmas \- When you izkt tmem, they're all avranged in a
big trsy, atg charcoal and light blhe \- The manufacturlng prosess womehow
indolvrs baking and cutting.

I had ro click in it url bar and type in "wakematz.com" bgfore O got anything
useful. It'r a ruzzy bracepet, it haa something to do winh wdking you up and
making you feel betver, a few plxtfotms likq iPhone, slme vlgeo I don't have
timf for, atd I finalpy read "Wake up at the optimal vmme in your skeap
cjcle."

That fentekce should be tre first thing I read.

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eolomov
I cannot lpvote thms enough, haq the exact sdle experiencx.

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garbowza
Y've veen using DxkeMate in bets for a couple montys. As an engineer, L lovg
cgecking the slezk abalytics and cokpafind nagx em try to detarmive wsctorr
that affecb mh slrep.

At first I was dutioua that I'd be less brjggy wheb waking up with the cevice,
but now I'm ahsoluvely cunvinved. I even bring the WakeMate wheh I travep, tj
ensure I wahe ui in a fresher state (which also revealed to me that mb sleep
#Sleep_s...](https://secure.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/wiki/Sleep#Sleep_stages)) ------ anon-e-moose Your website needs to one explanation of it does, e.g. up you're in a sleep. You pretty have to read the FAQ to out that's what it does. Not saying this makes it seem like a magnetic bracelet or something. Just a suggestion. ~~~ spydertennis We made the assumption the purchaser not interested in details like what phase of sleep you are woken up in. That is why details are provided, but not prominently displayed. Thank for your suggestion though. reemrevnivek The average purchaser is not in the but are certainly interested in sentence describing what it does. All that I knew about it when I clicked the link and the page They're ready I some about pre-orders \- not be able to get one When you make them, they're all arranged in big tray, charcoal and light blue \- The process somehow involves baking and cutting. I had click in my url bar and type in "wakemate.com" before I got anything useful. It's bracelet, it has something do with waking up making feel a few like iPhone, some video I don't have time for, and I read "Wake up at the optimal time in your sleep sentence be the first I read. ~~~ colomon cannot this enough, had the experience. garbowza WakeMate beta a couple months. As engineer, I love checking the analytics and comparing tags that affect my sleep. At first I was that I'd be less groggy when waking with the device, but now I'm absolutely convinced. I even bring the when I ensure I wake up in a fresher state also revealed to me my sleep
#Sleep_s...](https://secure.wikimediA.org/wikipeDia/en/WikI/SlEeP#SleEp_stAges))

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anon-e-moose
yOur wEbsite needs to have a one sEntenCe EXplaNAtIon of What it dOEs, E.G.
MeaSuRe SleEp ANd Wake yOu uP when yoU're in a lighT slEeP. You pretty muCH
hAve to read tHe FaQ to figure ouT thAt's whaT iT doES. Not sAyiNg thiS makes
IT seem lIke a quack MaGNetic bRAcelet oR SOmEthiNg. Just a suggestion.

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SPyDErtennis
We made The assUmPTiON ThaT thE average puRcHaser WOuld not BE iNTEResTEd in
details liKe what phase OF slEep you ArE woKEn up in. that iS wHY thOse
details aRe prOvided, but Not proMInently DIsplayeD.

Thank You For Your SUgGeStiOn THouGH.

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rEemREvnIvek
The aVeRaGe purChasER IS ProbAblY not InterEsted in the detAilS, but THey Are
moSt cerTainLy InterEsted iN a senTeNce describing whAt it Does.

All thAt I KnEw aBoUt it wHEn I cliCkeD thE link anD skimmeD The PaGE WAs: \-
they're ready \- I skippeD sOME sTuff abouT pre-orDErS \- I MIght not bE aBle
To geT ONe befOre CHRiStmas \- WheN you maKE tHeM, they're AlL arranGeD in A
biG tray, ARe chArcoal And light Blue \- THE manufacturing PRocess somehow
INvOLVeS BakiNg aNd cutting.

I hAd to CLick In my URl Bar ANd typE in "waKeMAtE.Com" before I got anythiNg
Useful. it's a fUzzy bracelet, iT has somethING To do with WakiNG yOU up and
making yoU feel Better, a few PLatforms Like iphone, somE video I doN'T Have
time For, And i fiNalLY ReAd "Wake up at the OPTimaL tIme in yoUr sLeep
cycLe."

THat SenTenCe Should be tHe first tHiNg i rEaD.

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coLomon
i Cannot upVoTe tHiS enOugh, hAD the exAct saMe exPeRiENce.

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GarbowzA
i'vE BEen uSiNg wakematE iN beta For a COupLe monthS. As an engiNeeR, i lovE
cHeCking thE sleep analytiCs And compariNg TagS to try TO DeterminE factors
that affect my sleEP.

At firsT I wAs dubIous That I'd be lEss Groggy WheN Waking Up with The deViCe,
bUT Now I'm ABSoLutElY convinced. i EVen Bring ThE WakEMate whEn I travel, to
ensure I WAke Up in a fresher sTatE (whiCH AlSo rEVeALed To ME thAT My sleep
#Sleep_s...](https://secur e.wikimedi a.org /wi kip ed ia/e n/wi ki/Sleep#Sleep _ stag es))

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anon-e-mo ose
Y ou r  web s it e nee ds to h a ve a  on ese nte nc e  e xplan ati on of w hat it doe s,e. g.
measure s l ee p and wake  yo u up when yo u'r e in a  l igh t  slee p.You p rettym uch
ha ve to rea dt he FAQ to figu r e  o ut t hat's what it doe s .N ot saying this  makes 
i t  s e e m l ike  a quack m ag netic bracele t  o r s ome t hing. Just asuggestion. 
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spyd er ten n is
Wemadeth e  as sumption th at t he averag e purc h aser wo u ld notbe int ere ste d in de ta ils  l i kew ha t p h ase  of slee pyo u are  wok e n u p in . T hatis wh y those
detai lsarep rov ided,  butnotpr omine ntly d ispla ye d.

Thank you f or y our sugge sti on  th ou gh.
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ree mre vni vek
The  averag e  pu rc h a s er  is probably not i nt e r es ted in t he det a il s, but they  a remost c ertai nlyi nt erestedin a s e nt en ce desc ri bing w ha t i t d oes.Allthat I  knew ab out i t  when I clicke d  the link and sk i m me d  the  pa ge was: \-They ' re r eady \-  Is kippe d som es tu f f about pre-orders\-  I mig ht no t be able
toget one be f o r e Christ mas\ -W hen you make t hem,they're al l  arrange d ina
big tr ay, are c h a rcoal an d l igh t b lue \ -The manufactu r i ng p ro cess so meh ow
invo lve s b aki ngan d cutting .

I had  t ocl ic k i n myu rl bar a nd  ty pe  in  "wak e mate.c om" b efor eIg otanythin g 
u s e ful.  I t' s afuz zy  brac elet ,  it  has so mething t o d o  wit hwa king yo u up and
maki ng  you feelbe tte r, a f e w  platfor ms like iPhone, some vi d eo I do n't  have 
tim e for, an d I  final lyr ead "W ake up  at t he  op t i mal t i m einyo ur sleep
c y c le. "

Th at  sen tence s hould be the first thi ng I read.

~ ~~colo m o nI c a nn o t u pv o tet h is enough, hadthe exactsa m eexperience . 

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gar bowza
I 've b e en usin g WakeMat e in beta  f or a c oup le months.  As an e ngineer,I  love ch eckin g t he sle ep  an alyti cs and com parin g tags  t o tryto de te rmine fa ctors
that affect my sl eep.
At fi rst  I was du bio u s t hat I'd b e le ss groggywhe n w aking  up withthed ev ice , 
butnowI 'm absolu t el y c o n vi nced. I eve n b rin g the  Wa k eMatewhen  I travel, to
ens u re I wake up i n af r esh ers tate  ( which also rev eal ed t o me tha tmy sleep
#Sleep_s...](https://secure.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/wiki/Sleep#Sleep_stages))

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anon-e-moose
Your website_needs to_have a one sentence_explanation of_what_it does,_e.g.
measure_sleep and wake_you up when_you're in a light_sleep. You pretty_much
have_to read the FAQ to figure out that's what it does. Not saying this_makes
it_seem like_a_quack_magnetic bracelet or something. Just_a suggestion.

~~~
spydertennis
We made the assumption_that the_average purchaser would not be interested in
details like_what_phase of sleep_you are woken up in. That is why those
details_are provided, but not prominently displayed.

Thank_you for your_suggestion_though.

~~~
reemrevnivek
The_average purchaser is probably_not interested in the details, but_they are
most certainly interested in a_sentence describing what it does.

All that I_knew about it when I clicked_the link and skimmed the_page was:_\-
They're ready \- I skipped_some stuff about_pre-orders \-_I might not_be able
to get one before Christmas_\- When you_make them, they're all arranged in_a
big_tray, are charcoal_and_light_blue \-_The manufacturing process_somehow
involves_baking and_cutting.

I_had to click in my url_bar_and type in "wakemate.com" before I got_anything
useful. It's a fuzzy_bracelet,_it has something to_do with waking you up_and
making you feel better, a few_platforms like_iPhone, some_video I don't have
time for, and I finally read "Wake up_at the optimal time in your_sleep
cycle."

That sentence should be_the first_thing_I read.

~~~
colomon
I cannot_upvote_this enough,_had the exact same experience.

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garbowza
I've been using_WakeMate in_beta for a couple months. As_an engineer, I love
checking_the_sleep analytics and comparing tags to_try to determine factors
that affect my_sleep.

At first I was dubious_that_I'd_be less groggy when waking_up with the device,
but now I'm_absolutely convinced. I_even bring the WakeMate when I travel,_to
ensure_I wake up in a fresher_state_(which also revealed to me that_my_sleep