thats actually a super good point i use tons of parentheses commas em dashes nested sentences etc my mind is so used to bouncing back and forth between ideas that when i write i add little parenthetical asides and tangents that i assume everybody needs for co text but when someone else reads it they go what the fuck dude pick a thought and stick with it for more than nine words  good observation thank you this will really up my proofreading game to make sure i write effectively for people who dont have a dozen simultaneous thoughts at any given time haha