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the word ""eventually"" implies (a) that it was inevitble be was always going to happen which is not necessarily so and speculation and (b) it is casting a judgement by implying it was a long time. We state 7 months and let the readers decide. The rest of the paragraph is another issue. It is factual and niether speculative or pov. But it might be trying to cram too much into 1 sentence and is short a ref but would any actually doubt what is said?  "