Capitalization again 

Doc,

I've responded to the points relevant to the proposal on that page, but I wanted to respond to your comments. I don't have strong opinions about grammar and my grammar skills are not strong. What I try to do in editing Wikipedia is follow the Manual of Style, but sometimes I can't tell what it intends. Because of that I have proposed language to make it more clear. If you could help with language that would clarify the MoS, I would be in your debt. Thank you,