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 GA review of Kitti's Hog-nosed Bat 

Thank you for your time reviewing the article so far. I was hoping you could give your quick input on the following two things:
I tried expanding the lead a bit, but now the problem I'm running into is that it's hard to summarize each section of the article without simply repeating information that appears later. I suppose this is a consequence of the article being short to begin with. Any advice?
Concerning your comment about drifting between singular and plural language, I'm not sure how to avoid this more than I already have. I tried to use singular (""Kitti's Hog-nosed Bat"", ""the bat"", or ""it"") wherever possible but in some cases I felt it was necessary to instead use plural for nouns like ""colonies"" and ""populations"".

Again, thanks for your help. talk "