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While your efforts to alter it are appreciated, your most recent work still has a number of problems:
 ""In any event"" is editorialising;
 it assumes Kerr's and Byng's decisions were wrong;
 it infers Byng was removed from office against his will;
 it infers Kerr was forced from office;
 it infers 3 and 4 were punnishment for having done 2;
 it is in the wrong section.
I still maintain the redundant ""personal consequences"" section should be dropped, and the remainder split, as I did .   "