Just following up on the above - I've implemented these revisions as an orphaned image of the logo was asked to be placed into use. Moving forward, I am more than happy to welcome any feedback/suggestions at any point in the future. Note that I mean for this to come across in a reasonable and light, collaborative tone  not in any way implying WP:OWN. Hope that the change between the old version and present version is evident as being helpful in building the encyclopedia. Regards,