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I agree with AfterMidnight that the fact that it has stayed there for a while is irrelevant... just because noone's picked up on it doesn't mean it's acceptable.  However, I think your latest revision is fine, and a good way to deal with it.  Hopefully the others will agree.  I'm still a but unhappy with the last sentence because again it's an affirmative sentence based on a gossip column, but overall I think it is an improvement.  User Talk  Review me! "