Keep at it. You are doing good.

Seriously, and sincerely, the sections you marked were weak. I chopped one completely, and I believe I beefed the others up. You probably do not agree I improved them, but I thank you.

However, I request that you mark the problems instead of chopping them out. Of course I have no objection whatever to adjustments, and I encourage you to scour the skeptical literature and add any important stuff that I overlooked.