Edit summaries 

Thanks for your attention to the occupation page.  A housekeeping matter... in future and per WP:TPG please put dialogue and reasons in sections in the TP, and use the WP:EDITSUMMARY as an index or table of contents sort of summary.  It's impossible to do effective DR towards consensus talking via edit summaries.  Sometimes I make the TP section first, and link it in the EditSum.  Thanks.