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 editing suggestions 

I would first advise you to look at other senate pages to see the way that people edit. The major problem that I see with your edits are the use of external link rather than ref tags. Do not use the single brackets around a name with the candidates campaign page. Instead use < ref > (but without the spaces) like all other editors use for citations. Another problem was your long explanation of what the one candidate does when ""businessman"" is sufficient information. Please correct your editing style before reverting the other editors corrections.   "