multiple たとえ even if (in a compound sentense)


> たとえ夏にあなたにあえなくても、たとえいっしょに旅しなくても、まだもっと待ってるよ。

The question is how to link two "even if's" in a compound sentence, as in the
example above. Perhaps, You don't need two たとえ and if you only conjugate the
て, adding the も to the second one, will it be clear enough? Or is there a
better way to express this kind of sentence?

Thank you very much!




These two even-if-clauses are simply placed in parallel ("Even if ～, (and)
even if ～, I will keep waiting for you."). Effectively, this sentence is the
following two sentences said together.

  1. たとえ夏にあなたに会えなくても、まだもっと待ってるよ。
  2. たとえいっしょに旅しなくても、まだもっと待ってるよ。

(I feel this もっと is a bit weird, but let me keep it for now)

You cannot combine these clauses into one using て, because "夏に会えない" and
"一緒に旅しない" are independent from each other.

> たとえ夏にあなたに会えなくて一緒に旅しなくても、まだ待ってるよ。

This sentence is grammatical, but sounds like "Even if I don't travel with you
together **because** I can't see you in summer, I will keep waiting for you,"
which is very different from the original nuance.

