Is my hiragana readable?


I've just started learning Japanese and I decided to learn hiragana and
katakana before proceeding because I want to stay away from rōmaji. How is my
hiragana handwriting? Is it readable? Any suggestions for improvement are
welcome. [![hiragana
chart](https://i.stack.imgur.com/MpkdQ.jpg)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/MpkdQ.jpg)

[![some examples... I found the sentence
online](https://i.stack.imgur.com/jPdOT.jpg)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/jPdOT.jpg)




The only thing that tinkle me a bit is that sometimes your stroke should be
more straight. In the first picture your **ほ** might look like **しま** to me.
Same for **に** on the second picture, in the second sentence. It might look
like a **しこ**. Besides that, I think your writing is very readable,
congratulations !

