Could anyone confirm my poor translation of these few sentences?


For my first question I would like some help on the following message I
received(the sentences are relatively simple since my Japanese skills are
quite low). But before starting I would like to say that this is the answer I
got from a Japanese school to who I was asking a way of contacting an old
friend of mine.

> Dear Ephismen,
>
> こんにちは。おげんきですか？ メールありがとうござます。 こちらはみんなげんきです。 Personさんのれんらくさきは、こじんじょうほうなので
> おしえられませんが、Ephismenさんのれんらくさきをメールで おくることはできます。 Personさんにメールしましょうか？

Here is the interpretation I made of it:

> Hello. Are you fine? Thank you for your e-mail. Here everyone is ok. Mr.
> Person does not study with us anymore, moreover the information you are
> asking are confidential, however we could transmit your informations to him.
> Would you like us to send this mail to him?

As I said before this is an interpretation and not a translation.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Cordially, Ephismen.




> Hello. Are you fine? Thank you for your e-mail. Here everyone is ok. Since
> Person's contact information is private information, we cannot tell you
> that, but we can e-mail Ephismen's contact information (to Person). Shall we
> e-mail to Person?

You got the message correctly overall (except that it does not explicitly say
Person does not study there anymore, but probably that is the case).




> Hello. Are you fine? Thank you for your e-mail. Here everyone is ok. Since
> Person's contact information is private information, we cannot tell you
> that, but we can e-mail Ephismen's contact information (to Person). Shall we
> e-mail to Person?

You got the message correctly overall (except that it does not explicitly say
Person does not study there anymore, but probably that is the case).

