Is this Japanese sentence correct?


My friend and I are new to Japanese, and we are trying to make sentences.

We tried to translate this sentence to Japanese:

> I can't play tennis, but I can play the piano.

And this is our Japanese sentence:

> テニスができない、でもピアノを弾くことができます。  
>  Tenisu ga dekinai, demo piano o hajikukoto ga dekimasu.

Is this sentence correct?




That's one way to say that in Japanese, except that in this case the reading
for 弾く should be ひく rather than はじく.

(Edit: Also, per user385630's comment, please note that since でも as "but" or
"however" can only be used at the beginning of a sentence, you'd also need to
correct that. You could do so by splitting this into two sentences or by
rephrasing with が or けど. Sorry not to have caught that before!)




That's one way to say that in Japanese, except that in this case the reading
for 弾く should be ひく rather than はじく.

(Edit: Also, per user385630's comment, please note that since でも as "but" or
"however" can only be used at the beginning of a sentence, you'd also need to
correct that. You could do so by splitting this into two sentences or by
rephrasing with が or けど. Sorry not to have caught that before!)

