How to say "In order not to make her angry but make her delighted"?


I want to translate the following sentence to Japanese.

> In order not to make her angry but make her delighted, I must choose a
> proper gift for her birthday.

My attempt is as follows,

> 彼女は **怒られないように、または喜ぶために** 、妥当な誕生日へのプルゼントを選ばなくてはならない。

Is it natural? Is there any other better way to say "in order not to make her
angry but to make her delighted" ?




You can use a causative verbal auxiliary せる like 彼女を怒らせるのではなく、喜ばせるために. 怒られない
is passive form.

I feel 妥当な is a bit unnatural in this sentence and それ相応の may be more
appropriate. And への in 誕生日へのプレゼント is extra.




You can use a causative verbal auxiliary せる like 彼女を怒らせるのではなく、喜ばせるために. 怒られない
is passive form.

I feel 妥当な is a bit unnatural in this sentence and それ相応の may be more
appropriate. And への in 誕生日へのプレゼント is extra.

