How do I combine 個人/個人的 and 未熟な?


> あくまで私の意見です
>
> あくまで私個人の見解です
>
> あくまで私の個人的な意見ですが

All of these seem idiomatic. But when I want to add another word 未熟な into the
mix, none of these seem right or widely accepted:

> あくまで私個人の未熟な意見です
>
> あくまで私未熟で個人的な意見です
>
> あくまで私個人的で未熟な意見です
>
> あくまで私未熟な個人の意見です




個人的 or 未熟 cannot follow directly a (pro)noun while 個人 can. I don't have a good
explanation for this, but similar things can be seen in the following:

  * 彼{特有, 固有}の _particular to him_ is fine while 彼特殊な is not possible.
  * 彼一流の _his superb_ is fine while 彼二流の is not possible.

So grammatically,

>   1. あくまで私個人の未熟な意見です
>
>   2. あくまで私 **の** 未熟で個人的な意見です
>
>   3. あくまで私 **の** 個人的で未熟な意見です
>
>   4. あくまで私 **の** 未熟な個人の意見です
>
>

are possible. One thing is that 未熟な意見 is not entirely idiomatic (an opinion
can get mature?), which makes all these give a slightly odd impression. Still
1 should be totally fine, and 2/3 mean roughly the same. 4 sounds more odd
because 未熟な個人 pops out and looks like meaning _opinion of mine as a premature
individual_ and also 私の個人の意見です is not very idiomatic.




個人的 or 未熟 cannot follow directly a (pro)noun while 個人 can. I don't have a good
explanation for this, but similar things can be seen in the following:

  * 彼{特有, 固有}の _particular to him_ is fine while 彼特殊な is not possible.
  * 彼一流の _his superb_ is fine while 彼二流の is not possible.

So grammatically,

>   1. あくまで私個人の未熟な意見です
>
>   2. あくまで私 **の** 未熟で個人的な意見です
>
>   3. あくまで私 **の** 個人的で未熟な意見です
>
>   4. あくまで私 **の** 未熟な個人の意見です
>
>

are possible. One thing is that 未熟な意見 is not entirely idiomatic (an opinion
can get mature?), which makes all these give a slightly odd impression. Still
1 should be totally fine, and 2/3 mean roughly the same. 4 sounds more odd
because 未熟な個人 pops out and looks like meaning _opinion of mine as a premature
individual_ and also 私の個人の意見です is not very idiomatic.

