Japanese introduction speech help for an English Teacher


I am currently applying for a job teaching English in Japan, and one of the
tasks is to introduce myself to the Japanese teachers at the school. It's
basically a test in beginner Japanese. I have worked out most of my speech,
but as I know very little Japanese, I would greatly appreciate it if someone
who does know Japanese can check it is ok for me, and maybe alter it if some
of the wording is wrong? As I have done it by myself. Also, I want to add an
etra bit (where I have written "Insert Here") but do not know enough Japanese
to translate this to say, and I feel that it would be pointless getting a
garbled machine translation.

If anyone has the spare time, It would be a great assisstance to me if someone
coul go through this a correct it for me. Thanks!

# Japanese:

> Konnichiwa Minna-san! Watashi wa Trigg Matthew des, watashi wa eigo. Watashi
> ha suki hon, anime to bideo geimu. (Insert here) Watashi wa
> tanoshinoshitemasu goruden weiku, comiket anime expo, eto taberu daifuku
> ichigo. Yoroshkun gozaishimasu!

# English:

> Good afternoon, everyone! My name is Matthew Trigg, I'm english. I like
> books, anime and video games. (insert here) I am looking forward to Golden
> week, Comiket anime expo and eating daifuku strawberries. Please take care
> of me!

Want to add (insert here) - I often reviewed and improved my friends' essays
at University, and help them with spelling correction, grammar and the correct
wording in sentence structure.




こんにちはみなさん。

トリッグマシューと申｛もう｝します。

イングランドから参｛まい｝りました。

本｛ほん｝を読｛よ｝むこととアニメを見｛み｝ることとゲームすることが好｛す｝きです。

コミケアニメエキスポに行こうと思っています。

