How to say ''Mathematics is the most beautiful and powerful creation of human spirit" in Japanese?


My attempt is as follows:

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> 数{すう}学{がく}が一[番]{ばん}で美{うつく}しくて強{きょう}力{りょく}な人{にん}間{げん}の精{せい}神{しん}の創{そう}造{ぞう}です。

Is it correct?




To use as much of what you used as possible, just **drop the 「で」** and you
will have at least a grammatical sentence. You **cannot** say 「一番 **で** +
adjective」 to mean "most (adjective)" or "(adjective)est".

The next step would be to replace the conversational 「一番」 by the more
formal「[最]{もっと}も」.

Then, I would seriously think about the validity of the 「が」 in 「数学が」. Having
been here so long, I know 「が」 is Japanese-learners' favorite subject marker.
(They often use it even when it should **_not_** be used at all.) More context
is needed to choose between 「は」 and 「が」 here. Generally speaking, one needs a
very good reason to use 「が」.




To use as much of what you used as possible, just **drop the 「で」** and you
will have at least a grammatical sentence. You **cannot** say 「一番 **で** +
adjective」 to mean "most (adjective)" or "(adjective)est".

The next step would be to replace the conversational 「一番」 by the more
formal「[最]{もっと}も」.

Then, I would seriously think about the validity of the 「が」 in 「数学が」. Having
been here so long, I know 「が」 is Japanese-learners' favorite subject marker.
(They often use it even when it should **_not_** be used at all.) More context
is needed to choose between 「は」 and 「が」 here. Generally speaking, one needs a
very good reason to use 「が」.

