Is my transcription of the handwritten kanji correct?


[![enter image description
here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/qesHA.png)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/qesHA.png)

I just want to make sure my transcription is correct of the sentence pictured.
(it probably isn't, but this is really the closest I could come up with.)

読みとみバーグアフ。微妙...

Is that correct?

[![enter image description
here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/KWzbY.png)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/KWzbY.png)

For the second picture, I think the transcription should be: サターンのマルコソみだいなｘｘ
with the ｘｘ being doodles most likely. For a while I thought the first ｘ was ミ
and then the two ｘｘ could have been です, but I'm pretty sure it's just doodles.




I believe the first one is (furigana added):

> 読【よ】み込【こ】みバーグラフ. 数秒【すうびょう】...

The second is harder for me to read. Here's my guess:

> サターンの  
>  マルコン  
>  みたいな  
>  x x x x

The サターンのマルコン makes sense given the image. See also
[Google](https://www.google.com/search?q=%22%E3%82%B5%E3%82%BF%E3%83%BC%E3%83%B3%E3%81%AE%E3%83%9E%E3%83%AB%E3%82%B3%E3%83%B3%22).

~~That last word is a smudge. It appears to end in シー, possibly ミー. The first
two kana are ... ???

Any more context you could provide would help.~~

⇒ Naruto in the comments points out that the last word is カンジ. The 濁点【だくてん】 or
〃 mark on the シ looked like a separate character and a single line ー to me,
which threw me off. Thank you, @naruto!

