extending an invitation with alot of information in it


EDIT: The invitation is being extending to someone called N that A/B has just
met the invitation is being extended by A to N as B is already going.

デニスレストランにいきませんか。Would you like to goto Denny’s restaurant (after class?)
_invitation_ Would like to change to. “my friend works at Denny’s restaurant.
We are going there after class would you like to come?

can anyone help me with this sentence i realize i am obviously missing クラス and
some effective way of putting it into the sentence as well as ともだち。 but i am
having trouble making such a big sentence. am fairly new to Japanese language
like lesson 6 of genki up to te form if that makes any sense to anyone.

perhaps it would be better to say "our friend works at dennys." we are going
there after class. would you like to come?




In Japanese, pronouns like I/we/they/you and so on are rarely spoken. Instead
they depend on context and verb conjugation to convey who it is they are
talking about. So I wouldn't worry very much about whether to say "my" vs.
"our".

I think the simplest version of what you're trying to say would be:

友達{ともだち}がデニーズレストランでアルバイトしてる。クラスのあと、みんなと一緒{いっしょ}に行{い}きませんか？

Choosing this phrasing, I'm assuming the person you're speaking to already
knows or is standing with you and all the people who are part of "minna". If
they do not know your group of friends who are going, then instead of みんな, you
could use ぼくら/ぼくたち/私{わたし}たち と一緒｛いっしょ｝ instead, which indicates you and some
other people, possibly including some unknown people.




In Japanese, pronouns like I/we/they/you and so on are rarely spoken. Instead
they depend on context and verb conjugation to convey who it is they are
talking about. So I wouldn't worry very much about whether to say "my" vs.
"our".

I think the simplest version of what you're trying to say would be:

友達{ともだち}がデニーズレストランでアルバイトしてる。クラスのあと、みんなと一緒{いっしょ}に行{い}きませんか？

Choosing this phrasing, I'm assuming the person you're speaking to already
knows or is standing with you and all the people who are part of "minna". If
they do not know your group of friends who are going, then instead of みんな, you
could use ぼくら/ぼくたち/私{わたし}たち と一緒｛いっしょ｝ instead, which indicates you and some
other people, possibly including some unknown people.

