How do I say "Comrade X" in Japanese?


I'm writing a short story for a Japanese class (beginner level). In the story
the action takes place in the Soviet Union, where we sometimes used to address
each other with the "comrade ..." greeting (the military in Russia still do).

How do I express this in Japanese? In the first draft I wrote 同志{どうし}の皆{みな}さん
because I had found [this
article](https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%90%8C%E5%BF%97). However, my
teacher did not understand the purpose of the word in the sentence and
recommended to replace it with 〜さん. I feel that it will affect the mood of the
story though.

I'm not yet able to read books in Japanese, so I don't know the literary rules
for this kind of thing. I've noticed that there's
[ミス・マープル](https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%9F%E3%82%B9%E3%83%BB%E3%83%9E%E3%83%BC%E3%83%97%E3%83%AB)
who is a "miss" even in translated Agatha Christie's novels, not a "-san". And
there's "Anjin-san" in the English version of James Clavell's Shōgun. Etc.
etc.




同志の皆さん is okay to translate "comrades", but 同志【どうし】諸君【しょくん】 would make it
sound doubleplus military.

(同志の皆さん may also indicate "like-minded people" or "people of same hobby"
according to context.)

To address "comrade (name)":

  * 同志 (name): generally sounds Russian
  * (name) 同志: generally sounds Chinese or North Korean (also applies to Japanese communists)




同志の皆さん is okay to translate "comrades", but 同志【どうし】諸君【しょくん】 would make it
sound doubleplus military.

(同志の皆さん may also indicate "like-minded people" or "people of same hobby"
according to context.)

To address "comrade (name)":

  * 同志 (name): generally sounds Russian
  * (name) 同志: generally sounds Chinese or North Korean (also applies to Japanese communists)

