How do I make my translation less stilted or flow similar to the original Japanese?


I'm translating the following line of dialogue spoken by Character A to
Character B.

「怖がらなくてもいいわ。もう襲ったりしないから」

The translations I made are the following:

> "There’s no need to be afraid. Because I will no longer be attacking you
> anymore.”
>
> "There’s no need to be afraid. Because I will be no longer attacking you
> anymore.”

This became a issue on the [English stack
exchange](https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/494308/what-are-the-
naunces-of-the-placement-of-be-in-the-following-two-sentences), when I tried
asking for some help with the placement of the word 'be', as shown in the
above link.

A commenter over there suggested "Because I will not be attacking you
anymore." which sounds stilted for the character's dialogue.

I need some possible English translations that will work for the translation
of しない (to do nai form I.E. "will no longer/will not be" in the above
translations), that are not stilted or flow similar to Japanese.

My reason for requesting a translation that will flow similar to Japanese is
that this story is similar to Star Wars as far as languages go. Its similar in
that the in-story language being spoken by the characters is currently
Japanese, but as a translator, I need to convey this using the vernacular of
the English language.

TDLR: What is a good English replacement for "will no longer/will not be" that
is natural in English and flows similar to Japanese?




This thread may well be closed, as the question does indeed seem to be more
about the English than the Japanese. That said, here's my take:

When translating, it's often more important to focus on the meaning and
intent, and to convey that in a natural fashion. For example, Japanese often
structures things as `ABC。XYZ から` → `Thing ABC. Reason XYZ.` English often
relates similar content with either the reverse order, or by putting the two
sentences together. As examples: _"I'm done attacking you, so you don't need
to be afraid anymore."_ Or, _"No need to be afraid, I'm done attacking you."_
Etc.




This thread may well be closed, as the question does indeed seem to be more
about the English than the Japanese. That said, here's my take:

When translating, it's often more important to focus on the meaning and
intent, and to convey that in a natural fashion. For example, Japanese often
structures things as `ABC。XYZ から` → `Thing ABC. Reason XYZ.` English often
relates similar content with either the reverse order, or by putting the two
sentences together. As examples: _"I'm done attacking you, so you don't need
to be afraid anymore."_ Or, _"No need to be afraid, I'm done attacking you."_
Etc.

