Asking someone to sing a song with me


> Ryura! Would you like to sing 'Isshin Furan' with me and a friend?

This is what I have so far...

> Ryuraさん！「一心不乱」を私と一緒に歌えませんか？

Please help me make it sound more fluid if possible!




> Ryuraさん！私たちと「一心不乱」を歌いませんか？  
>  -OR-  
>  Ryuraさん！一緒に「一心不乱」を歌いませんか？

Note that it's uta **i** masen and not uta **e** masen. The latter denotes
inability. Additionally, you also have the option of using more informal
language.

