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Write an essay (up to 7,000 characters) to apply for a study abroad scholarship with the following prompt: 

Gilman Scholars represent the United States as citizen diplomats in their host communities; they reflect a diversity of values, beliefs, and opinions that is fundamental to providing a balanced representation of the United States abroad. Gilman Scholars are expected to contribute to the goal of building mutual understanding by sharing what it means to be an American, learning about the host culture, and building meaningful relationships. As a U.S. citizen, how will you represent and share what it means to be an American during your program? How will you seek opportunities to become more culturally engaged and have meaningful interactions with people and cultures different from your own during your abroad program?
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Studying abroad is an incredible opportunity to not only gain academic knowledge and professional experience but also to immerse oneself in different cultures and learn about the world beyond one's own borders. As a U.S. citizen, I believe it is my responsibility to represent and share what it means to be an American during my study abroad program. I am eager to embrace this role as a citizen diplomat, to engage with my host community, and to learn about their culture and way of life.

To represent what it means to be an American, I will approach this opportunity with an open mind and a willingness to learn from my host community. I believe that respect and curiosity are essential qualities to cultivate in order to form meaningful relationships and promote mutual understanding. I will actively seek out opportunities to share my culture and traditions, while also listening to and learning from the people I meet.

One way I hope to contribute to the goal of building mutual understanding is by sharing my experiences growing up in the United States. I come from a diverse background, and I have learned firsthand about the challenges and opportunities that come with cultural differences. Through my own experiences, I have come to appreciate the value of open-mindedness and inclusivity, and I hope to share these values with my host community.

In addition to sharing my own experiences, I am also eager to learn about the culture and way of life of my host community. I believe that seeking out opportunities for cultural engagement is essential to gaining a deeper understanding of the people and places I will encounter. Whether it is through participating in cultural events, attending lectures or talks, or simply exploring the city and its surroundings, I am excited to engage with the culture in a meaningful way.

I believe that having meaningful interactions with people and cultures different from my own is not only important for building mutual understanding but also for personal growth. By stepping outside my comfort zone, I hope to broaden my horizons and challenge my assumptions about the world. I am excited to learn from people who have different perspectives and life experiences, and I am eager to form lasting relationships with the people I meet.

Finally, I believe that the opportunity to represent the United States as a citizen diplomat is a privilege and a responsibility. As a Gilman Scholar, I will work to promote the values and beliefs that are fundamental to American culture: inclusivity, respect, and a commitment to building a better world. I am committed to serving as a positive representative of my country, and I am eager to learn and grow from this experience.

In conclusion, I believe that studying abroad is an incredible opportunity to engage with different cultures and learn about the world. As a U.S. citizen, I am committed to representing and sharing what it means to be an American during my study abroad program. I am eager to embrace this role as a citizen diplomat and to contribute to the goal of building mutual understanding by engaging with my host community and seeking out opportunities for meaningful cultural interactions. Thank you for considering my application.
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That's not a bad short essay. Do you think that would be good enough for me to get the scholarship? I really need this to work out!
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It depends on which university you are applying for. For some universities, it may be enough to get in, but I would highly recommend that you review the text yourself to make sure it meets the standards of the University you are applying for. 
I would also like to mention that even though I am a good resource for getting started on a project, you will not learn much from you experience at University if you only use me to write your essays and do not do any of your own research. Half the fun of being at a University is the self accomplishment that comes from the skills developed while working on a tough assignment.