NIVEA MEN Fresh Active 50ml Deo Roll On | With Fresh Ocean Extracts| 48 H Freshness| 0% Alcohol | Dermatalogically Approved & Paraben Free Formula
Errors identified:
1. "Dermatalogically" should be corrected to "Dermatologically".
2. "48 H Freshness" should be corrected to "48-Hour Freshness"
3. Add vertical bars (|) to separate distinct features and specifications for improved readability.
4. A hyphen should be added to "Paraben-Free" for grammatical accuracy.
5. The volume "(50ml)" should be moved closer to the product name for clarity and added a comma for separation.

Suggested title:
NIVEA MEN Fresh Active Deo Roll-On, 50ml | With Fresh Ocean Extracts | 48-Hour Freshness | 0% Alcohol | Dermatologically Approved & Paraben-Free Formula