HP All-in-One PC Ryzen 5 7520U 27-inch(68.6cm) FHD IPS Display, 16GB LPDDR5, 1TB SSD, AMD Radeon Graphics, Wireless Keyboard and mouse combo, FHD Camera, (Win 11, MSO, Shell White, 6.72Kg) 27-cr0445in
Errors identified:
1. "68.6cm" should be corrected to "68.6 cm".
2. "6.72Kg" should be corrected to "6.72 kg".
3. Vertical bars "|" should be used to separate features for improved readability.
4. Remove the parentheses around "(68.6 cm)".
5. "Keyboard and mouse" should be corrected to "Keyboard & Mouse".
6. Clarified "16GB LPDDR5" as "16GB LPDDR5 RAM" for specificity.
7. Clarified "Win 11" as "Windows 11".
8. Clarified "MSO" as "MS Office".

Suggested title:
HP All-in-One PC, Ryzen 5 7520U | 27-inch FHD IPS Display (68.6 cm) | 16GB LPDDR5 RAM | 1TB SSD | AMD Radeon Graphics | Wireless Keyboard & Mouse Combo | FHD Camera | Windows 11, MS Office | Shell White | 6.72 kg | 27-cr0445in