erm you know kind of er call that a first draft and then sort , you know, sort of try and  sort of go through the books again and stick a few references in to back up the points you've made so you can see it relates to other people's evidence erm trying to go through it again and  knock out the  well you know what I mean kind of statements and, and, you know, you can gradually sort of make the er  grad you know sort of but again it's, it's, it's one of these processes that I find, you know, you need to go through again and again and again to sort of get it er get it together erm   so erm 