   Could you give me opinions about my industrial song?
  http://www.amol.wireland.org/Cyber Transmutation (demo).mp3This is specific music, not very popular among music makers. Please tell me what do you think about it. There are more songs by me at www.amol.wireland.orgThanks,aMoL 
  I like it!  It sounds like a great background track for some of the more modern style games out there.  Would fit well into the movie scene as well as a fight song or such.Only three thoughts on this one: 1) It''ll really only serve as background music, the song doesn''t have a melody or repeating theme to follow, so there''s little to tie it together.  Though I''d also assume thats a style of music thing as much as anything else (I don''t listen to too much Industrial stuff)2) I don''t like the loss of the kick at 00:11.  The flange is a cool effect and it fits in well, but my subwoofer was just getting warmed up and you take it away 3) The entrances at 00:16 and 00:32 can be made much more intense by stopping all sound a beat before (with maybe a reversed cymbal effect or so).I really like the guitar riffs you have down!  They don''t remind me of anything I''ve already heard (which I like!)Just thought of one more thing.  Play on the high hat a little more, spice up the part a little in the sustained guitar sections, the drums sound cool but overall real boringRM ;quote:This is specific music, not very popular among music makers.NOT TRUE!  If you join audiogang.org you will see that a huge number of composers like myself listen to and create Industrial/Metal.Track is cool! Nice groove to it.-schreckwww.schreckmusic.com ;  Sounds just like the old Command and Conquer music! I used to love that.I think it could do with more atmosphere from the pads etc, perhaps.What did you use to make it?   [ MSVC Fixes | STL Docs | SDL | Game AI | Sockets | C++ Faq Lite | Boost  Asking Questions | Organising code files | My stuff | Tiny XML | STLPort] ;  Thanks for the feedback. I really need it as most of people don''t know much about this type of music.I use Psycle Modular Tracker to create my music. I think it is the most flexible application to make music as there are tons of plugins to it and it has nice, old Fasttracker style interface which I am used to.amol.wireland.org - more industrial stuff by me ;  I like it all except for that synth at the end. It sounds a bit thin. I would personally use something a bit fatter 