   New wiki tutorial on using the PopCap framework
  Hello everyone (I hope this is the right place to post this). I just wanted to let you guys know that I have chosen the GameDev wiki as the new home for a series of breakout tutorials I have been working on for the PopCap framework! After several hours of reformatting the first tutorial is online here: PopCap Framework TutorialsIf you could I would appreciate if people could check out part 1 of the tutorials and provide some feedback in this thread as to the writing style and if there is anything I can do to make the tutorials more clear.Thank you :) .   
  (Yes, I know. This topic is more than a week old.)I've only tried out the PopCap Framework briefly, a couple of months ago. It never really got me interested, however that's not the point of this post.While I appreciate that there's people trying to improve the wiki, I think that it's written in a sense that isn't really meant for the wiki medium. You state your name, write in first person form, and it's written in a somewhat personal way. If you look at Wikipedia, for instance, you'll find that every article there is written very impersonally. This is due to the nature of a wiki -- that everyone's supposed to contribute, and that there shouldn't be a sole author taking credit for the work (even though that's the case this time).If someone changes a part of your articles, which is very possible and encouraged by wikis, you'll be the one who's responsible for that modification even though you might not want to be, and even though the person who makes the changes might not want another person being credited for text he/she didn't write.I'm definitely not trying to bash your tutorials -- I think they look supberb, and I can tell that they took a lot of time to create. Lots of clear images, clean code and correct grammar. It just doesn't feel suited for a wiki, and this isn't the only article on the wiki which does it this way. Perhaps it's just me exaggerating. Perhaps I should stop bickering and go and change all these things myself.Anyways, what I suggest is that you let go of the first person talking, and write in the introduction that the article(s) are based on a tutorial series by Donald May orginally written for the PopCap Framework forum.   