   Talented Writer
Name: Zachari LaCombeWebsite: My website is still under construction, but I have uploaded a little sample excerpt at this link: SampleExpected Compensation: Although all payment is welcome, I'm just looking for a serious team/project to work with.Contact Information: Email: zacharilouis@gmail.comAIM: zacharilouisPrevious Projects: I haven't completed any projects, but I have written back stories and helped flesh out histories as favors for other writers on projects. I'm hoping to get a completed project under my belt as well.   
  Just posting to say I read your sample - I liked it. (It made me want to read more, which is good.)One suggestion: there were a few typos and grammatical errors that you might consider cleaning up. I admit I'm a bit of a stickler when it comes to grammar and punctuation, but I do think getting these sorts of details right is important when presenting your work for others to evaluate.Nice work though - I hope someone takes you up on your offer :)   ;  Thanks! I've been so into writing the rough draft of that that I'd never realized how sloppy it was. I've found a couple errors within seconds of looking at it.   ;  It does inflame my inner grammar-Nazi a bit, but on the whole its not shabby. Something you might want to try and work on is grounding the scene better before you leap into the dialog; create a stronger mental image.Do you have any experience with technical writing?   ;  I've never done technical writing, but I do know what it is quite well. I tend to stick to fiction though. I'm entirely capable of technical writing though.   