   Critique my articles
  I'm beginning to write a series of articles/tutorials that will teach people C# and .NET from the very beginning, without assuming any prior knowledge of anything. I'm even going to write a an article about number systems and things like that just in case readers don't know.I've written the first 2 articles and I would like some input on the writing style, sense of objective accomplishment regarding the level I want to teach at...etc. I'm just writing these articles to try and help people, so if the articles don't accomplish that objective then I have to make them better, and to do that I need your help pointing out what is missing.Both articles can be found by clicking here. Please let me know your honest feedback.Thanks.   
  ok well I have yet to read the articles but on the layout, you seem to have it as a blog, where it would seem more logical to me to have the layout list the tutorials in the order which they're meant to be read.Kind of like this code on the cob subsectionEDIT: another comment is with your code you have it as images, should make a css element with a white background and make/use a C#->highlighted html converter for the code blocks.   ;  Hmm , thats true. I put up a blog so that I could get a system up and running as quick as possible. I'm gonna have to find a way to order those posts until I can get my own custom made site up which won't be for a while atleast.   ;  ok as for the content it's very in depth, and I didn't catch any errors on my readthrough(I'm no C# master though). Just a warning though the order you've presented the information to know the theory before seeing any results can make it hard to keep people interested in the informationEDIT: and again with the test at the end of the second tutorial you could make interactive. EDIT2:# Whats the difference between a class and an object?# Whats a method?should be# What is the difference between a class and an object?# What is a method?try not to use contractions in professional articles, and if you do punctuate them correctly.   ;  Excellent, I like this kind of feedback, really helpful! I've made the required edits.I'll have to ponder on the subject of your first paragraph.Thank very much.Keep the feedback coming :D   ;  Anyone else read the articles and have any comments?   