   Hello! What's your opinion of this tracks?
Hello! I'm doing music for free for other people's game and I'm always looking to improve. I would like to have some feedback in a few themes if possible: This is a chiptune oriented track for a very simple and funny zombie game. Maybe too simple but it seems it works. What's your opinion? https://soundcloud.com/estudioevergreen/01-estudio-evergreen-safe-in?in=estudioevergreen/sets/legenda-scintila-ost-2012 And now something more orchestral for a game that was the final thesis of a friend. The requisites was to be something funny and with a battle spirit all together: https://soundcloud.com/estudioevergreen/03-sion-tower-fase-1?in=estudioevergreen/sets/sion-tower-bso-2011  I'm looking forward to your opinion . Thanks in advance Best RegardsEstudio Evergreen.
The chiptune was interesting, and pretty cool.  I think it would be better if the lead melody wasn't looping constantly, because I can see it getting annoying after a while (assuming the zombies are being held off for extensive amounts of time).  I suppose if this wasn't something you wanted to do, you could change the sample for that lead sound to something that doesn't sustain as long, like a glockenspiel type sound? The only thing I could suggests for the orchestral piece was that the lower range woodwind (I think) instrument sounded a little too much like a sample instrument, so maybe try some chorus, reverb, or edit each notes velocity to make it sound a little more human; by the time the arpeggiated part kicked in I really loved the track. I think it's really good and quite pleasant to listen to, so it'd be well suited to a game.   All in all, I dig :);Thanks for the comments! About the zombies, this was the song for the "city" so you are not supposed to be there a lot, lot of time, but anyways I will check it. About the woodwind, you are totally right. It should sound more natural, I will probably try to resample this in the near future. With more human things. I will post it again when I have it ready ;);A quick comment on the Sion Tower - Tema Principal; A struck of genius at 2:11, but it dies again at 2:14. The way you all of sudden mellowed down was beautiful, I just wish you'd stay there for a while.;The chiptune track is pretty nice. Reminds me of Sega/SNES a bit. Nice progression on the melody too, but it is just a bit repetitive. Something about the bass seems to stick out a bit to me too.  The orchestral one is just begging for some thundering Timpani rolls and hits, in my humble opinion :)