   some songs of mine
  i'm just wondering if you guys could give me some critique maybe as far as recording or mixing or whatnot on these songs... i'm not a singer i just like writing songs and recording. tell me what you think...myspace accountthanks in advance guys   
  first and last bump   ;  I think you added a little bit too much echo to the vocals.And personally I think there should be some part in the song whithout any vocals, no offense, but when the song is almost ending I'm kind of 'tired' of listening to the non-stop vocals, a little pause somewhere in there would be nice.But overall I think you've done a pretty good job, and it doesn't sound amateur at all :)   ;  Not bad for an amateur composition and recording :)I also think there's too much vocals, and they're hard to understand sometimes, due to the echo or just slurring, not sure. The melody is also a bit simple (okay, it's only one guitar, but still...). Is that a cricket in the background? :D   