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The Empress says:Oh Rin, it's wonderful. This is the first Teddy or Dominique slash I've ever read, and this did not disappoint. Not at all. As usual, your way with words has absolutely astounded me. I especially like the bits in italics before each paragraph. They could have been silly or too much or something but they weren't at all. It was almost like a whisper, showing us what we're going to see and then we see it and it's beautiful.

The helpless Teddy, so lost in his desperation, his need. And Dom, with his constant searching for the perfect one, when all along he has it. Isn't that just typical though of people? Not just Dom, though the characterisation fits him perfectly. Having something, whether it be love or something else, and searching for something better elsewhere, only to find it's been there all along. This is like a 'the-grass-is-greener' fic, except the sweetest was right where he'd left it.

I loved it, Rin. It was perfectly lovely. Well done :)

XOXO
Shiloh

Author's Response: Aw, Shiloh, thank you so much! I... I can't even tell you how much this means to me. Especially coming from an author like you. I... wow. Thank you!

Ah, yes, the infamous Dominique. I'd always pictured him as a girl, but I was browsing the Lexicon and was startled to learn that he could be male! After that, I just HAD to write about him. I'm really, really glad you liked his characterization.