original passage: These shows were neither a critical nor popular success, perhaps because the show focused little on cooking—a major part of the Japanese program. The show had a small audience section with bleachers, and the audience yelled relentlessly during the show (sounding much like a sports audience). Shatner walked around the kitchen sampling the more expensive items, the chefs refused to say what they were doing, and the cameras rarely showed the food preparation.
original sentence: These shows were neither a critical nor popular success, perhaps because the show focused little on cooking—a major part of the Japanese program.
sentence2: If the show's producers wanted to please critics above all, would they be advised to give more or less screen time to the ins and outs of the cooking process?
sentence1: Although the Japanese show was heavily focused on the cooking, these shows gave it little air time, which could have explained why they were poorly received by critics and audiences alike. The show had a small audience section with bleachers, and the audience yelled relentlessly during the show (sounding much like a sports audience). Shatner walked around the kitchen sampling the more expensive items, the chefs refused to say what they were doing, and the cameras rarely showed the food preparation.