So far, this is a very well written story!  So well written that the words quickly disappear to be replaced by the action viewed with the mind's eye (as any well told story will do).  However, I keep getting pulled back to the words due to simple grammatical errors like the use of 'then' where it should read 'than', or 'passed' where it should read 'past', or 'weary' where it should read 'wary'.  Those are the most common mistakes, and fixing them would cover most of the errors in the story, making the book a much more enjoyable read.  I'm looking forward to finishing this and moving on to book 2!  Very fun so far!