There's just way too much action, far too many lying cheating men, and loads of money spent flying to England.  The main character who is supposed to have some smarts falls for one jerk after another.  She works for a threatening idiot, and never gets around to contacting the FBI until late in the narrative - even though she knows they are interested in the boss and getting him locked up would end her troubles.  But that would mean a few 100 pages less of nonsense.  I'm all for people living their dreams of being novelists, but this isn't a good book.