Do I have this diagramed out right?
As drawn, your left switch will operate your switched outlets, the right switch will operate the lights attached to the top-right cable, and any lights attached to the top-middle cable will be always-on.

Assuming what you want is for the left switch to operate the lights attached to the top-middle cable, the right switch to operate the lights attached to the top-right cable, and for the outlets to be always-on, you need to connect things more like this:



I've not drawn neutrals or grounds.  All the white wires should be connected together; they will all be acting as neutrals.  The grounds should be connected as in your original diagram.