Can I upload a pre-print during peer review that includes changes suggested by reviewers?
The link to the Wiley policy states that you cannot update the pre-print (submitted version) with the accepted version: "Authors may also post the submitted version of a manuscript to non-commercial servers at any time. Authors are requested to update any pre-publication versions with a link to the final published article." The update is only a link to the published version. The accepted version can only be posted open access after 12 month as stated in Sherpa/RoMEO.

A version including changes that came in during peer review is no longer the submitted version.