Would a question that requires an amount of text to explain be good to send?
As a busy person who receives these sorts of emails, my response to email tends to fall into two categories:


I can respond to this right now, and get it out of my queue.
I'm going to need to think about this some, I guess I'll put it off for later... and later turns out to be days, weeks, or months before it surfaces again, if ever.


Unfortunately, your draft email above will most definitely fall into category #2.


"What do you think about..." is an open-ended request for an essay. Is one sentence enough, or a page, or a full scientific paper?
You want the reader to digest 16 lines of technical discussion with an unclear goal of evaluation.
You also want the reader to go read your blog post, which makes me wonder if that's the real point of this.


You've thus got 3 different things you're asking of the reader, none of which actually says what you really want to get out of the interaction.

And that's the real problem: why are you writing to this person?


Do you have an answerable question they can help you with? (i.e., not "what do you think..." but "Does Concept A actually mean that Red Ones Go Faster?")
Do you want to show them your work and see if they think it makes sense?
Do you just want them to be aware that you exist?
Something else?


When you figure out what you most want, focus the email on precisely one thing that can be addressed quickly, and try to keep the whole thing to only 3-4 sentences.  If you can do that, you also will have forced yourself to be clear enough about what you want that a useful answer is much more likely.