Complexity vs Space in Schematic
As drawn, there's no doubt about how things connect.
If you'd like to make it more obvious what is going on then I'd draw one of these two ways:







simulate this circuit &ndash; Schematic created using CircuitLab

Electrically, it is the same.  From looking, though, it is obvious that you have a voltage divider on the Signal line and that your capacitor does nothing but bypass the 24Volts.

The second is a little more compact, but the divider is still obvious.

In the end, it usually comes down to how much room you have to fiddle with when drawing your diagram.  Sometimes you have to squeeze something in, then you place the parts where they'll fit.  But, in general try to follow conventions when placing parts in the diagram as it makes it that much easier to read for the next guy (who may be you in a couple of years.)

Clarity is the deciding factor.  The clearer, the better.  Sometimes this even means using less space on the diagram by logically grouping things instead of having connections run every which way.