I hate leaving mediocre or negative reviews. I do. My problem with "Destiny United" was not so much the writers voice- She's a good writer- it's the writers choices. There were too many contradictions, these three being the biggest to me-

1) Erin has serious issues. She's borderline agoraphobic and was, at one point, raped. Okay then she's an agoraphobic rape victim that goes out drinking in order to be able to be social... she refused to go into a convenience store for a moment but she goes into a busy, loud bar and gets tanked? I don't think so.
2) She rebels just for the simple sake of rebelling. Okay, that seems fairly prevalent in these stories so whatever- but (and this ties in with #1) she refused to go into a store for five minutes because she was so scared of being in a social setting and people looking at her, so she ran across the street to a bar where she had a bunch of guys hitting on her. Um yeah...which ties into #3
3) She freely admits she gets boyfriends so they will take care of her. How did she get these boyfriends (the ones that take care of her) in the first place? How did they meet?

None of this made any sense. I WISH I could give this book a better review, but I can't.
I hate leaving mediocre or negative reviews. I do. My problem with "Destiny United" was not so much the writers voice- She's a good writer- it's the writers choices. There were too many contradictions, these three being the biggest to me-

1) Erin has serious issues. She's borderline agoraphobic and was, at one point, raped. Okay then she's an agoraphobic rape victim that goes out drinking in order to be able to be social... she refused to go into a convenience store for a moment but she goes into a busy, loud bar and gets tanked? I don't think so. 2) She rebels just for the simple sake of rebelling. Okay, that seems fairly prevalent in these stories so whatever- but (and this ties in with #1) she refused to go into a store for five minutes because she was so scared of being in a social setting and people looking at her, so she ran across the street to a bar where she had a bunch of guys hitting on her. Um yeah... which ties into #3
3) She freely admits she gets boyfriends so they will take care of her. How did she get these boyfriends (the ones that take care of her) in the first place? How did they meet? None of this made any sense. I WISH I could give this book a better review, but I can't.