If the object of this very short story was to draw me in to the series - it failed.  Most of the development is in the intro that is given in the Product Description.

I understand that for only 99 cents a reader should not expect that much but I have actually came across some really well developed stories and novels for that price - this was not one of them.

Pros:
The short story does have a unique slant on the Vampire race.
The short story is well edited
The writing style was smooth
I did not hate reading the story

Cons:
Evan is immediately in lust/love with Marissa.  I have read and enjoyed novels where there is the "met my mate and I'm in love/lust and got to have her" plot line - but this is not the case in this short story and just did not feel the draw for the protaganists.

Marissa is okay with handing over her car keys and letting some stranger drive her home because he is so "hot" - even though the reader is told that she is the shy type and does not do one-night stands - that really did not compute.

Marissa adjusts way too quickly to everything.

This short story comes across as more flat and one-dimensional because of the lack of development in characters.  I was never drawn in enough to care about the characters.

Bottom Line:
There was a lot of potential to be an absolutely great PR but was just too short to do it justice.  It had all the elements just not the development.  In my opinion - it would have been better to have spent more time in world building and character development and have charged more for a finished product.
If the object of this very short story was to draw me in to the series - it failed. Most of the development is in the intro that is given in the Product Description. I understand that for only 99 cents a reader should not expect that much but I have actually came across some really well developed stories and novels for that price - this was not one of them. Pros:
The short story does have a unique slant on the Vampire race. The short story is well edited
The writing style was smooth
I did not hate reading the story

Cons:
Evan is immediately in lust/love with Marissa. I have read and enjoyed novels where there is the "met my mate and I'm in love/lust and got to have her" plot line - but this is not the case in this short story and just did not feel the draw for the protaganists. Marissa is okay with handing over her car keys and letting some stranger drive her home because he is so "hot" - even though the reader is told that she is the shy type and does not do one-night stands - that really did not compute. Marissa adjusts way too quickly to everything. This short story comes across as more flat and one-dimensional because of the lack of development in characters. I was never drawn in enough to care about the characters. Bottom Line:
There was a lot of potential to be an absolutely great PR but was just too short to do it justice. It had all the elements just not the development. In my opinion - it would have been better to have spent more time in world building and character development and have charged more for a finished product.