Interesting story and premise, but for me, the typos and grammatical errors got in the way. For more on that subject, see the paragraph below, but as for my thoughts on the actual story and premise of the book, I'd simply say that every single reviewer's opinion shown here is correct.  Read them all, then make your decision as to whether or not this book is for you.  It definitely is controversial.

I continue to wonder if many of these self-published writers actually proof-read their work before making it public. Absolutely drives me crazy. My personal pet peeve is the use of he/she/I when it should be him/her/me. For example, "She asked John and I for help" should actually be "She asked John and ME for help."  Just because there's an "and" in the phrase does not automatically mean you use the "I" form, even if you *do* think it makes you sound more grammatically aware (?). Serious authors know and understand the proper/appropriate usage of these words. Unfortunately, in this book, this particular issue shows up frequently, and (along with the many other typos and grammatical errors) made it really hard for me to give this read a fair chance.  I actually did want to know how the story turned out, so I did finish reading the entire book, despite repeated occurrences of apostrophes where none belong, incorrect form of certain words (thrown instead of throne, as one other reviewer pointed out), and much more. I just wish, once again, that self-published writers would take themselves seriously enough to proofread their work.
Interesting story and premise, but for me, the typos and grammatical errors got in the way. For more on that subject, see the paragraph below, but as for my thoughts on the actual story and premise of the book, I'd simply say that every single reviewer's opinion shown here is correct. Read them all, then make your decision as to whether or not this book is for you. It definitely is controversial. I continue to wonder if many of these self-published writers actually proof-read their work before making it public. Absolutely drives me crazy. My personal pet peeve is the use of he/she/I when it should be him/her/me. For example, "She asked John and I for help" should actually be "She asked John and ME for help. "  Just because there's an "and" in the phrase does not automatically mean you use the "I" form, even if you *do* think it makes you sound more grammatically aware (? ). Serious authors know and understand the proper/appropriate usage of these words. Unfortunately, in this book, this particular issue shows up frequently, and (along with the many other typos and grammatical errors) made it really hard for me to give this read a fair chance. I actually did want to know how the story turned out, so I did finish reading the entire book, despite repeated occurrences of apostrophes where none belong, incorrect form of certain words (thrown instead of throne, as one other reviewer pointed out), and much more. I just wish, once again, that self-published writers would take themselves seriously enough to proofread their work.