Let me begin by saying I cannot remember the last time I started a book and then consciously set it down with the intention of never picking it up again.

I read a LOT of books.  I mean, minimum of 5 a week usually.  And I can forgive  lot in the way of typos and poor editing---with cheap kindle books that is the price you pay sometimes.  But this was beyond poor editing.  I suspect the author missed quite a few basic english classes.  Commas are a  huge pet peeve of mine, but we all mess those rules up occasionally.  Not 5 times a page though.  That isn't an "oops"---it is a total lack of basic knowledge of grammar and writing rules.

Add to that horrible dialog, sappy/naive characters, unbelievable plot setups, and a very unimaginative start and this author lost me at the 14% mark. The use of "?1" so often reminds me of a high school kid sending text messages.  I am sure there is more but I gave up even trying to get interested.  I didn't even last long enough to meet the 2nd romantic contendor for Misty's heart.  I am left to wonder how many of the 5 star reviews here were created by the author's friends & family.
Let me begin by saying I cannot remember the last time I started a book and then consciously set it down with the intention of never picking it up again. I read a LOT of books. I mean, minimum of 5 a week usually. And I can forgive  lot in the way of typos and poor editing---with cheap kindle books that is the price you pay sometimes. But this was beyond poor editing. I suspect the author missed quite a few basic english classes. Commas are a  huge pet peeve of mine, but we all mess those rules up occasionally. Not 5 times a page though. That isn't an "oops"---it is a total lack of basic knowledge of grammar and writing rules. Add to that horrible dialog, sappy/naive characters, unbelievable plot setups, and a very unimaginative start and this author lost me at the 14% mark. The use of "? 1" so often reminds me of a high school kid sending text messages. I am sure there is more but I gave up even trying to get interested. I didn't even last long enough to meet the 2nd romantic contendor for Misty's heart. I am left to wonder how many of the 5 star reviews here were created by the author's friends & family.