This book had so much potential.  The characters were great, could have developed into a good full book, but it didn't.  Story was very short, there is not a lot of time for character development and everything happens in a day.  We are introduced to many characters that will eventually have their own book.

Story is about Dane, one of four brothers who grew up in the small town of Surrender.  Dane was coming home for the first time since he left ten years ago.  He was coming home to see his brothers and in the back of his mind, hoping to find Charlie there.  She was the girl he left 10 years ago in search of a better future for him and pursue a career in writing.  Now he comes back and is quite accomplished, but never quite forgot about Charlie.

Lo'and behold there she was in town.  She had just moved back.  As soon as she sees him, they become intimate within the first 10 minutes.  Ok, I thought that was a bit of a stretch for me, given that she was heartbroken and how they broke up.  Book has lots of steamy scenes and that took up most of the book.  Book had a happily ever after, but there wasn't any real drama, deep plot or development. I wish it would have been longer, more time to develop the story and characters.
This book had so much potential. The characters were great, could have developed into a good full book, but it didn't. Story was very short, there is not a lot of time for character development and everything happens in a day. We are introduced to many characters that will eventually have their own book. Story is about Dane, one of four brothers who grew up in the small town of Surrender. Dane was coming home for the first time since he left ten years ago. He was coming home to see his brothers and in the back of his mind, hoping to find Charlie there. She was the girl he left 10 years ago in search of a better future for him and pursue a career in writing. Now he comes back and is quite accomplished, but never quite forgot about Charlie. Lo'and behold there she was in town. She had just moved back. As soon as she sees him, they become intimate within the first 10 minutes. Ok, I thought that was a bit of a stretch for me, given that she was heartbroken and how they broke up. Book has lots of steamy scenes and that took up most of the book. Book had a happily ever after, but there wasn't any real drama, deep plot or development. I wish it would have been longer, more time to develop the story and characters.