Let me say first, I have read other books by this author and was pleased with them. This book did not live up to her standard of writing.

Okay chapter 1 began with a menage. There is oral and sexual intercourse. I am trying to keep this PG 16. So I won't use explicit language. Later in the book, she's having sex with her mate and he states the acts in chapter 1 were a fantasy. However, in chapter 1 her father comes in and smells the 2 men's scent.

So my thoughts of her being a virgin during her cycle and the main character taking it was ridiculous. It continued to be ridiculous throughout the book.

The story was well done until chapter 16. Yes, most of it was sex, but the interaction between the 2 main characters sounded believable. Who knows what happened after that? I certainly don't know, and again I've read her books to know she has good story lines. This is not the book for it.

The interaction between the 2 main characters remains good throughout the book, but when they are apart the story falls apart. Those parts of the story are unbelievable.

There were some typos, but not enough to deter from the story. Terms didn't bother me, but I agree this is not a paranormal book. There was not shifting. There were hints of it, but please it is just not heard of for a an alpha male to walk into the forest with a backpack when he can shift and run. If there is a beast inside them waiting to get out then let the sucker out and show it in the story.

Right now this is free. Don't waste the download time.
Let me say first, I have read other books by this author and was pleased with them. This book did not live up to her standard of writing. Okay chapter 1 began with a menage. There is oral and sexual intercourse. I am trying to keep this PG 16. So I won't use explicit language. Later in the book, she's having sex with her mate and he states the acts in chapter 1 were a fantasy. However, in chapter 1 her father comes in and smells the 2 men's scent. So my thoughts of her being a virgin during her cycle and the main character taking it was ridiculous. It continued to be ridiculous throughout the book. The story was well done until chapter 16. Yes, most of it was sex, but the interaction between the 2 main characters sounded believable. Who knows what happened after that? I certainly don't know, and again I've read her books to know she has good story lines. This is not the book for it. The interaction between the 2 main characters remains good throughout the book, but when they are apart the story falls apart. Those parts of the story are unbelievable. There were some typos, but not enough to deter from the story. Terms didn't bother me, but I agree this is not a paranormal book. There was not shifting. There were hints of it, but please it is just not heard of for a an alpha male to walk into the forest with a backpack when he can shift and run. If there is a beast inside them waiting to get out then let the sucker out and show it in the story. Right now this is free. Don't waste the download time.