The story was good.

Where the story is concerned, this book had it going on. The characters were interesting and the action was consistent, and the dialog was stimulating.

The writing could have used a bit of work.

It was clear that the writer didn't re-read her story prior to publishing, or these simple grammar errors would not have happened. I found myself chuckling every time I came across one, because it usually involved a missing word, or a word used out of context, and it was somewhat amusing. But this book was rick with these kinds of errors.

But if I were to base my review on the substance and not the details, I would say that this book was very good, although it could have been longer.
Stories with endings will create more fans than stories that leave you hanging. Especially with 24 books in The Hunter lineup. In order to keep readers, you can't be pulling the rug out from under them.
I will be compiling a list and researching whether or not to continue with this series.
The story was good. Where the story is concerned, this book had it going on. The characters were interesting and the action was consistent, and the dialog was stimulating. The writing could have used a bit of work. It was clear that the writer didn't re-read her story prior to publishing, or these simple grammar errors would not have happened. I found myself chuckling every time I came across one, because it usually involved a missing word, or a word used out of context, and it was somewhat amusing. But this book was rick with these kinds of errors. But if I were to base my review on the substance and not the details, I would say that this book was very good, although it could have been longer. Stories with endings will create more fans than stories that leave you hanging. Especially with 24 books in The Hunter lineup. In order to keep readers, you can't be pulling the rug out from under them. I will be compiling a list and researching whether or not to continue with this series.