This book could have used an editor, that's for sure. After the first few missing words, words used out of context, and misspellings, It started making me laugh. It was so consistent throughout the book, that I found myself chuckling each time.

There were also a number of contradictions in the book, that made me laugh out loud. and most of them were within the same paragraph, so that made it even funnier.

The peeps in the story were in their mid 20's to 30's, yet they acted like young children, so I ignored the ages stated and pictured them as young adults instead. It made it a much easier pill to swallow.

I can't really complain, however, because the book was free. But I am unlikely to buy more books, in the event that they are equally like this one.
It was good for a laugh, and the story was original, so I gave it a good rating based on that alone.
This book could have used an editor, that's for sure. After the first few missing words, words used out of context, and misspellings, It started making me laugh. It was so consistent throughout the book, that I found myself chuckling each time. There were also a number of contradictions in the book, that made me laugh out loud. and most of them were within the same paragraph, so that made it even funnier. The peeps in the story were in their mid 20's to 30's, yet they acted like young children, so I ignored the ages stated and pictured them as young adults instead. It made it a much easier pill to swallow. I can't really complain, however, because the book was free. But I am unlikely to buy more books, in the event that they are equally like this one. It was good for a laugh, and the story was original, so I gave it a good rating based on that alone.