The story was ok but needed work. I kept feeling like I was missing something. I even bought the first book so I was more than familiar with the characters. I did not like the first book but wanted to give the second one a chance. I couldn't even finish it. I felt like everything was secondary to the sex. It was almost as if the storyline was an afterthought, i.e. the accidents, abduction, etc. It lacked the cohesiveness that you usually find in a good mystery/thriller. The hero/heroine were so standoffish outside the bedroom, I had serious doubt they even liked each other. I just couldn't get into the book plus the grammatical errors didn't help either.
The story was ok but needed work. I kept feeling like I was missing something. I even bought the first book so I was more than familiar with the characters. I did not like the first book but wanted to give the second one a chance. I couldn't even finish it. I felt like everything was secondary to the sex. It was almost as if the storyline was an afterthought, i. e. the accidents, abduction, etc. It lacked the cohesiveness that you usually find in a good mystery/thriller. The hero/heroine were so standoffish outside the bedroom, I had serious doubt they even liked each other. I just couldn't get into the book plus the grammatical errors didn't help either.