▁with ▁intro duct ory ▁marks ▁preceding ▁each ▁chapter , ▁and ▁critical ▁comments ▁inserted ▁frequently ▁between ▁pass ages , ▁sentences , ▁and ▁even ▁words ▁of ▁the ▁text . ▁ ▁Jin ' s ▁version ▁of ▁Water ▁Mar gin ▁is ▁most ▁well ▁known ▁for ▁the ▁dr astic ▁alter ations ▁that ▁he ▁makes ▁to ▁the ▁text . ▁ ▁Ear lier ▁versions ▁of ▁the ▁text ▁are ▁ 1 0 0 - ▁or ▁ 1 2 0 - chapter ▁in ▁length . ▁ ▁Jin ▁delet es ▁a ▁large ▁portion ▁of ▁the ▁story , ▁from ▁the ▁second ▁half ▁of ▁chapter ▁ 7 1 ▁to ▁the ▁end ▁of ▁the ▁novel . ▁ ▁In ▁order ▁to ▁bring ▁the ▁modified ▁text ▁to ▁a ▁conclusion , ▁he ▁compos es ▁an ▁episode ▁in ▁which ▁Lu ▁Jun yi ▁has ▁a ▁vision ▁of ▁the ▁execution ▁of ▁the ▁band , ▁and ▁am ends ▁this ▁to ▁the ▁second ▁half ▁of ▁chapter ▁ 7 1 . ▁ ▁Jin ▁also ▁comb ines ▁the ▁Pro log ue ▁of ▁earlier ▁ed itions ▁with ▁the ▁first ▁chapter , ▁creating ▁a ▁new , ▁single ▁chapter ▁titled ▁" Ind u ction ". ▁ ▁This ▁forces ▁the ▁ren umber ing ▁of ▁all ▁subsequent ▁chap ters , ▁so ▁Jin ' s ▁version ▁of ▁Water ▁Mar gin ▁is ▁referred ▁to ▁by ▁sch ol ars ▁as ▁the ▁" 7 0 - Ch apter ▁Edition ". ▁ ▁In ▁addition ▁to ▁the ▁large ▁changes ▁described ▁above , ▁Jin ▁also ▁changes ▁the ▁text ▁of ▁the ▁remaining ▁chap ters ▁in ▁three ▁general ▁ways . ▁ ▁First , ▁he ▁impro ves ▁the ▁consist ency ▁of