▁some ▁sections , ▁such ▁that , ▁for ▁example , ▁chap ters ▁whose ▁content ▁do ▁not ▁match ▁their ▁titles ▁receive ▁new ▁names . ▁ ▁Second ly , ▁Jin ▁makes ▁the ▁text ▁more ▁compact ▁by ▁removing ▁sections ▁that ▁he ▁feels ▁do ▁not ▁advance ▁the ▁story , ▁and ▁by ▁ex cis ing ▁the ▁incident al ▁Sh i ▁and ▁Ci ▁vers es . ▁ ▁Finally , ▁Jin ▁makes ▁subt le ▁changes ▁to ▁the ▁text ▁for ▁pure ▁literary ▁effect . ▁ ▁These ▁changes ▁range ▁from ▁emphas izing ▁the ▁emot ions ▁of ▁characters ▁to ▁changing ▁story ▁elements ▁to ▁make ▁them ▁more ▁comp elling . ▁ ▁Jin ' s ▁critical ▁comment ary ▁frequently ▁oscill ates ▁between ▁sympath izing ▁with ▁the ▁individual ▁band it - h ero es ▁and ▁condem ning ▁their ▁status ▁as ▁out la ws . ▁On ▁one ▁hand , ▁he ▁critic izes ▁the ▁evil ▁official ▁system ▁that ▁has ▁led ▁many ▁of ▁the ▁ 1 0 8 ▁hero es ▁to ▁become ▁band its . ▁ ▁He ▁also ▁express es ▁adm iration ▁for ▁several ▁of ▁the ▁men . ▁ ▁On ▁the ▁other ▁hand , ▁he ▁calls ▁the ▁band ▁" m align ant " ▁and ▁" ev il ". ▁ ▁He ▁especially ▁critic izes ▁Song ▁Ji ang , ▁the ▁leader ▁of ▁the ▁group . ▁ ▁Jin ' s ▁removal ▁of ▁the ▁last ▁ 3 0 ▁( or ▁ 5 0 ) ▁chap ters ▁of ▁the ▁novel ▁can ▁be ▁seen ▁as ▁an ▁extension ▁of ▁his ▁condem n ation ▁of ▁band it ry . ▁ ▁In ▁these ▁chap ters , ▁the ▁band its