▁manuscript ▁exists ▁of ▁the ▁first ▁draft ▁of ▁, ▁which ▁at ▁that ▁time ▁( J uly ▁ 1 9 3 3 ) ▁was ▁entitled ▁T oh il . ▁This ▁is ▁now ▁in ▁the ▁National ▁Library ▁of ▁Paris . ▁ ▁" T oh il ' s ▁Dance " ▁is ▁the ▁title ▁of ▁chapter ▁ 3 7 ▁of ▁the ▁finished ▁work . ▁The ▁main ▁differences ▁between ▁this ▁draft ▁and ▁the ▁published ▁book ▁can ▁be ▁found ▁in ▁chapter ▁ 1 2 ▁(" C amil a ") ▁and ▁in ▁the ▁fact ▁that ▁the ▁former ▁la cks ▁the ▁latter ' s ▁ep ilog ue . ▁ ▁The ▁first ▁published ▁version ▁of ▁ ▁came ▁out ▁in ▁ 1 9 4 6 , ▁while ▁Ast ur ias ▁was ▁semi - ex iled ▁in ▁Mexico ▁City . ▁The ▁publication ▁was ▁fin anced ▁by ▁Ast ur ias ▁himself , ▁a ided ▁by ▁his ▁parents , ▁as ▁the ▁manuscript ▁had ▁been ▁rejected ▁by ▁the ▁publish ers ▁to ▁whom ▁he ▁had ▁sent ▁it . ▁This ▁first ▁edition ▁suffered ▁from ▁numerous ▁typ ographical ▁errors . ▁These ▁errors ▁were ▁only ▁rect ified ▁in ▁the ▁third ▁edition , ▁published ▁in ▁Argentina ▁in ▁ 1 9 5 2 , ▁which ▁also ▁included ▁numerous ▁substantial ▁changes ▁introduced ▁by ▁Ast ur ias ▁himself . ▁This ▁edition ▁is , ▁therefore , ▁the ▁first ▁definit ive ▁version ▁of ▁the ▁book . ▁As ▁noted ▁by ▁Ger ald ▁Martin , ▁editor ▁of ▁the ▁ 2 0 0 0 ▁critical ▁edition , ▁" me as ured ▁in ▁terms ▁of ▁its ▁decis ive ▁historical ▁influence ," ▁the