Good things: All characters have different personalities( most of them, anyway.). The spelling, grammar, and punctuation is great. It is a action, action, action story with a good amount of humor too.
Bad things: Unfortunately it's not quite done yet and probably will not be done for a while. Hambone puts in cliffhangers at the end of every chapter and is getting on my nerves because there is no consistent load rate. That is the only thing I don't like.
Overall, it is a good book. I would recommend it for anyone who likes interstellar sci-fi.