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Mr. Frank. "Dussel we agreed that Anne can only use the desk twice a week from 4:30 from 5:30.
Anne; May I use my desk please?
Dussel; Move child. My work is important.
Anne; Get up or im gonna get my father.
Dussel; Get him. I don't care.
Mr. Frank: That's enough! Anne will have the desk two times a week and Dussel gets it the rest.
Jordan, be sure to check Mr. Dussel's first dialogue. I think "replies" is misplaced. Also, you indicate a stage direction "(Anne says)" that is unclear. Don't forget to capitalize the first words of sentences. and to use punctuation to end the sentences.
At the dinner table in the secret annex.
Mr. Frank-Hey this is a new year we all should get along.
Mr. Dussel-Yea this year were gonna love and be kind.
Mr.frank,Mr.Dussell-Mr.Vandann We will like to give you extra food.
Mr.Dussel- Thank you, but theres a lot of food here for use all to share.
Anne: what are you doing at my desk you better not be looking at my stuff.
Keighshawn Pearson Ela 8:7	6/12/15	Script	Characters	Mr.Frank	Dussel	Anne	Anne- Mr. Dussel Can I Get My Desk?	Dussel- No im using it right now so wait	Anne- Let me use the desk or im telling my dad	Dussel- I Don't care go tell him im using it	Anne- DAD!!!!!