foreboding of the fate of Yorick’s skull?
Or will it be a clarity between two dark triangles?
Will death consist of nonbeing or of dangerous substances.
This short poem is among your best that I have seen, Gershon. I love Neruda also and think you have carried his thought to a fine level. At my age, this poem chills me. It seems the 'obscure tunnel' is all too close. Based on the passage above, How might a different punctuation or phrasing of the third line change the overall tone and meaning of the poem?
This prompt doesn't seem malicious.