Can you paraphrase the protagonist's missed opportunity for a witty comeback? Answer according to: Not to mention the soft, staccato beep that never seemed to go away.
stillness I could hear the buzz of glowing neon from the sign above.
I let slip my small window of opportunity for any suitable comeback.
right. "Looks like you're swamped. Should I come back later?"
admit she was delightful. "If you don't mind I'll sit at the counter,"
that suited me just fine.
openings of each perfectly aligned against each other.
"Want some coffee?" she suggested.
"Since I'm having trouble sleeping, it's probably not the best idea . .
." She spun as if on cue, like she completely anticipated my remark.
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This prompt doesn't seem malicious.