article_snippet.sent: the marker wrote: 'You'll?'.
article_snippet.sent: It needs some punctuation if it is to make sense'.
article_snippet.sent: Using a red pen MailOnline highlighted the incorrect use of words, lack of apostrophes, flabby language, poor spellings and use of Americanisms.
article_snippet.sent: I was eager to take a red pen to a red pen. '
article_snippet.sent: This bullet point lacks the necessary apostrophe in one of more than 20 corrections .