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Title: Interesting premise, but...
Review: the entire story is incoherent and disjointed. The story doesn't flow well and I especially hate the way it ends. (The last paragraph is rather crude, in my opinion).The hero and heroine are hardly believable in their actions. They fall into bed at the earliest opportunity and the heroine does some pretty dumb things when she's supposed to be a brilliant scientist. The heroine in Dark Desire (a much better book), a brilliant doctor, was much more believable and didn't give in nearly so fast.Don't get me wrong; I am a fan of Ms. Feehan -- particularly of her early Dark series -- but I can't say that I like the direction that her writing has been taking of late. Magic in the Wind (from Lover Beware) also had the same glaring faults as this novel and I could barely finish Lair of the Lion, I wanted to shake the stupid heroine to her senses!
