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Title: Poorly written
Review: The book interested me from the start because of the material it covers -- pyramids, Akashic Records, etc. The artwork on the front jacket is also a real eyecatcher, I have to admit. Beautiful!But as I started to read, I kept running into many poorly handled changes in the characters' points of view, the first being in chapter one where I wasn't sure if the POV was that of Alex or the dog. It turned out to be the dog. I tried to ignore these occurances and just let the story carry me on it's own merits, but it just didn't work. These mistakes kept jolting me back into reality or just plain confusing me. I'm afraid I have to give the book only one star because of lack of craftsmanship. The use of a sharp pencil during the final editing of the manuscript would have helped the book tremendously.
