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Title: Desperately seeking an editor...
Review: I read the glowing professional reviews and thought this book had promise. OMG! The prose was often good, but buried in daily tedium that didn't advance the story and page after chapter of repetitive musings of characters that weren't interesting. The protagonist, Sugar and her sugardaddy, William, were only given sketchy backstories. Did the editor fall asleep reading this? The ending? I guess the author got as tired of the story as I did and decided to end it by leaving the characters, pretty much in mid-step with nothing resolved, nothing learned... I could almost see him muttering, 'how clever!' No, just irritating, dude.
