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Title: ZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Review: A bounding pace by itself does not a story make. I found the pace more jittery than bounding, actually. This kind of story doesn't call for intricate layers, but some justice could be done to characters even so. Without it there's not enough plot to make sex scenes effective enough to be worth reading from scene to scene. Nor did skipping to the 'good parts' keep me awake, since they are all alike. Above all, why pay the price of two good books to get this?
