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Title: Amateur and Unedited
Review: This is the most amateurishly written book I have ever seen. My spouse, a university press editor, opened it at random and began laughing. I will avoid anything from this press in future. I cannot believe that an editor, or even a proof reader, came within a mile of the manuscript. The author even spells "Air Force" as "Airforce" and, sequentially, "Vladivostok" and "Valdivostok" There are even double spaces between sentences; a sure sign of a typewriter orientation, rather than a word processor. There is a tiny germ of writing talent here, which could be nourished by writing classes and an editor. However, my friend Harry Turtledove's short story "Drang Von Osten" does this theme better-and shorter.
