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Title: Forced Plot
Review: Lacey Farrell, a young (30ish) woman is witness to a murder(er). She works for a real estate firm showing high priced condo's, etc. One woman calls to put her dead daughter's condo up for sale but she is having a hard time of it since she really doesn't believe her daughter's death was an accident...Come on Mary! Don't insult us readers! Might be good if you didn't ask your readers to buy into everything making it so forced... And the ending -- how Lacey figured everything out was just as forced.And the romance in the book -- Lacey finds a guy she is interested in while in the witness protection program but decides that after one date she just can't lie (or at least not be open about her past) but yet he decides to still pursue her and pursue her (after only 1 date) --reads more like stalking than romance!
