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Title: Actually 2.5 stars
Review: This is one of Diana's better recent efforts. No drug busting subplots, no mercenaries, and no criminals. But one thing pulled me out of enjoying this book as a total piece of brain candy. The military/Green Beret/linguist background of Grange. As a former service member and a speaker of the Arabic language, this section bothered me. Farsi is not Arabic, nor is it a dialect of Arabic (it's actually a seperate language, with a different alphabet). Also, it's hard for me to imagine that someone who is threatened with court martial would be given the option of "court martial or honorable discharge". Possibly a general discharge, but NOT an honorable discharge. Diana needs to learn how the military works before using it as a plot device.I did like the story, and it flowed well and <mostly> made logical sense. Tellie wasn't a door mat, and J.B. wasn't quite as bad as some of the other review would have had me believe.
