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Title: Couldn't get into it.
Review: The story line was good but the dialogue ruined it for me. It was unnatural and stilted in my opinion. For example, I don't know any man, let alone a football player, who says "Lordy" or "lovely" all the time. The author wrote as though she was expecting her English teacher to grade her. Rachel was a sexy vixen one minute (and even then her dialogue was flowery) and a very proper speaking society matron the next. If the dialogue had been more normal or natural it would have been easier to relate to the characters.
