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Title: Do people actually talk like this?
Review: I picked up this book today from the library because the description sounded perfect for a lazy summer's day read. The only problem was that I was put off by the writing immediately when the word "fey" or some variation of it was used three times in the first part to describe Carly and Katie. The dialogue, however, was what forced me to stop reading. Do people actually say, "I hope that's going to be in the affirmative?" or "Oh, very nice indeed." I am twenty-five, close to Katie's age, and i never speak like that. Plus, as an English teacher, I constantly tell my students to use dialogue effectively to reveal important thoughts, feelings, or relationships. Not to tell an entire story.
