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Title: poorly written and proofread
Review: I was not an english major but the number of fragmented sentences is unbelieveable.Also when McGovern leaves college in South Dakota for the airforce, it is written that the college president and a large number of the student went to Milwaukee to see him off on a train to Minneapolis.Anyone with any sense of geography would understand you do not go from North or South Dakota through Milwaukee to get to Minneapolis.It is also a long way for the student body to travel to say goodby. Did he get Milwaukee mixed up with Sioux Falls,Fargo or Bismark?
