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Title: Characters with no motivation
Review: The reason you keep reading this novel is because you keep looking for the meat. You get no real sense of any of the characters, why they are doing what they are doing, etc. An event takes place, or a new feeling is expressed, and you've had no inkling, and cannot figure out why this character did or felt what they did. Scenes do not build. We start over with each character with each scene.
