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Title: Wasn't able to finish it
Review: I wanted to like this book, I really did, but the author's writing style and choice of descriptive words distracted me from the story. There were too many "Like a", and "As ifs", which are fine when inserted discreetly once in awhile, but become overkill when used in every other paragraph.The description of the tornado was distracting at best. The author used the following words, all within a few pages: "a white-tailed monster", "demonic dragon", "beast", "snowy tornado", "devil", "gyrating monster", vacuumous spiral", "serpent", "ghastly specter", "capricious adolescent" and "white vortex". It was too much.I read parts aloud to my husband and we shook our heads and just groaned at the choice of wording. I can not commend this book.
