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Title: Writer unfamiliar with her subjects
Review: The protagonist is a college linguistics adjunct professor, but the character doesn't tall, think, or act like one at all. She's more like a stereotype of a high school English teacher. Ironically, the Kindle edition is chock full of spelling, spacing, and punctuation errors, as bad as the typical community college English papers the character says she hates. The central character is supposed to be a diver, but she keeps calling fins, "flippers!" She's very inconsistent, sometimes diving without proper safety equipment and standard precautions, sometimes getting angry with others for failing to follow safety protocols. The dialogue is awkward, and often really illogical. For example, she spots a cigarette smoker on land as a "swimmer because of the way he moves." Former competitive swimmers can spot each other y the way they swim, maybe, and by the way they don't smoke. Very disappointing.
