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Title: A Mess
Review: I was able to finish this book, but just barely. Heavy going all the way. The raw materials for a great story are there, but poorly arranged and presented. Footnotes made up most of the bulk, many directly repeating the text. The same quotes were used in different notes. Several dates were obviously wrong. The most interesting nuggets of information and poignant scenes, such as Don Antonio Robidoux getting a warm cup of coffee after the Battle of San Pasqual, were never mentioned in the text, but buried in the mass of footnotes. Although the action took place over great areas of the West, from Chicago, St. Louis, Santa Fe, Ft. Laramie, to southern California, there were no Maps. Detailed maps should have been included, with the locations clearly marked. Badly done.
