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Title: Ill-served by the editor
Review: A first time author, particularly, needs a good editor. What happened here? Aiming for a "conversational" style is fine, but titling a chapter Tell Mom -- to %$#* Off or calling a date an A..hole is not conversational, it's vulgar.Add in the contradictions, repetitions, padding, grammattical lapses and even typos, and the sum total is a poorly-constructed, poorly written and poorly edited book, Part Two, Chapter Six: Stop Believing You Can't Do Better
