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Title: Disappointing
Review: There are a lot of things good about this book including interesting characters and an okay plot even if it is a little formulaic (noble born child kidnapped into slavery so he doesn't know who he is). Ms. Marston does have skill as a writer, particularly in description. However, this book is BADLY in need of an editor. Redundancy, sometimes in back to back sentences was particularly annoying. The characters lapse in and out of their accents more than Kevin Costner did in his infamous "Robin Hood." There are pages and pages of build up but then the climatic scenes are over in a few paragraphs. Nothing a good rewrite wouldn't fix. Perhaps the publisher had a deadline. At any rate, I'm not going to take a chance on the rest of the trilogy.
