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Title: Ambitious first novel..but misses the mark
Review: The subject matter is fascinating, and in the hands of a more skilled writer I am sure it could have been a wonderful read. But here the writing is so overwrought and leaden that that the plot becomes secondary to the slow pace of the narrative. The problem is mostly the huge holes in the story line, and that Ms.Tripp is constantly hitting readers over the head and not letting them come to their own conclusions. The author is simply not a compelling storyteller, author there are some well crafted passages.
