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Title: Boring....dead dialogue
Review: I have been attempting to read this book for the last few days and it has got some of the most boring dialogue I have ever encountered on the written page. Not only that, but the author is TELLING instead of SHOWING when it comes to the entire book. I don't feel any sympathy,or anything else for that matter, for the characters because they aren't written with any sense of feeling. She has put wooden words into their mouths so they feel to me like walking talking robots. If the characters had no names I would not be able to distinguish one from the other based on their inner strengths,weaknesses,or dialogue. For a fiction book to work there has to be differences between the charcters to create conflict....and there is none here.I don't know how this book got published, and the editor of it ought to be drawn and quartered.Don't read this book....instead go read some Chelsea Quinn Yarbro, who actually knows how to write a good 'vampire' fiction novel.
