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Title: Could have used an editor
Review: I eventually stopped reading this book because the writing was so grating. It reads like a high-school writing project: awkward sentence structure, overuse of sentence fragments, klunky dialouge, and the annoying over-use of full names. I know the guy's name is "Ethan Levin", so you don't need to remind me every other page. Just say "Ethan".The story is mildly interesting, but it wasn't enough to look past what an editor should have fixed. With so many books in the queue, I wasn't going to waste time with this one.
