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Title: My crritique
Review: I kept reading this book because of my interest in the subject, and in spite of two glaring disruptions that almost forced me to simply stop reading and toss the book away.Disruptions included too many grammerical errors and too many discriptions. The author, by describing hundreds of personal reactions (even in parts of a dialogue) severly limited the reader's imagination. In essense, her repeated descriptions, while well-meaning, placed me in handcuffs. All of the grammerical errors didn't helpThis seemed to me to be a second or third draft that required a lot more work. Time, research, action, editing, writing skills, rewrites. Then the book would really come to life, and become a part of history.
