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Title: Perhaps the worst written books I've ever attempted.
Review: "It was a dark and stormy night". If Morris had written that line it would have been more like:"During the winter soltice a memory flooded back from his miserable childhood in which the evening was damply cold, unsettlingly gloomy, with wind-shattering, rain-driven clouds darkening the stormy night."At least 50% of this book could have been eliminated and the descriptive phrases would have still been overbearing.
