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Title: Between Time and A Bonfire
Review: As has already been said: this piece was not written by Vonnegut, and it shows. The pieces that they use are good, some of the new stuff works too, but it doesn't hold together. The plot looks like shotgun spray on a barn wall. Pieces hit well here and there, but they don't connect. The tang part is good, a wonderful reason to read this short piece, but don't expect any coherence.
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