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Title: An incompetent hack joined by two incompetent hacks.
Review: I don't know why I bought this book, having found O'Neill's original "Maid" book to be poorly written and not very erotic. I guess I hoped that having others helping him in the writing might improve things.They didn't.He and his partners are generally unable to write arousingly unless you happen to be a big fan of baby talk, poor grammar, enemas, and the odd pop culture or food reference. Be ready for multiple uses of 'gina to describe the vagina. Cute, isn't it? Not really.Particularly unworthy of publication are the stories addressed to "you," although the "you" is not the general reader. There is a reason why basic writing classes advise against this direct discourse, and that is because it seldom works.Frankly, I am quite annoyed with myself for wasting the time and money. I will never bother with anything written by Devlin O'Neill again.
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