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Title: An OK storyline but.....
Review: the writing and editing could use lots of work. Constant repetition of certain 'cute' phrases is tedious. I was especially annoyed by the overuse of Secret Service codenames. Blatant typos should have been caught by good editing. The characters are not developed at all, and the way that he writes about women is sophomoric. I do not need to know Clancy's political opinions about abortion, the military, feminists, or China.
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