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Title: Too Wordy
Review: Great stuff, but this book could have been half as long. I don't have it in front of me, but lines like "you have to intrigue your readers, listeners, or, in our case, viewers" are torture and they're found on every page. Just say "audience." If scripts have to be lean and relevant, why not books about them?It's a pretty good book, but it's too expensive. I need more value for my script procrastinating dollar.
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