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Title: I didn't care about a single thing in this book
Review: I'd like to bring up a new reason as to why Eragon sucks. Galbatorix. We do not feel any real hatred of him or his government, thus we cease to care about anything else in Eragon.One example is the slaughtered village with the speared baby. Galbatorix apparently has no reason for this massacre other than "Because he is evil." This is the sort of inane randomness one would expect on Mad TV. Like the Urgals, we are TOLD that Galbatorix is evil but not SHOWN it.Another example is the slave trade. Maybe we could learn to hate the Alagaesian slave trade if we could figure out WHY THE HELL IT MATTERS! The slave trade is tacked onto the plot and could be removed without changing the story in any way. It doesn't matter to the plot, thus it doesn't matter to the reader.Galbatorix is like every other character in Eragon. You couldn't care less about his existance
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