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Title: How has this gotten such high ratings???
Review: I am not impressed with this author for the following reasons:1. Blatant disregard for proper punctuation - this makes the text difficult to follow and the story without emotion. The character's dialogue isn't in quotation marks. IE: Look out there is a car coming, said Mark. VS. "Look out! There is a car coming," exclaimed Mark.2. Author was completely ineffective in developing characters and finishing storylines. Too many unanswered questions and things left unsaid.3. Author was completely ineffective at creating a timeless story. At first it seemed like the 50's, then he talked about stick pregnancy tests and VCR's so that brought it to 80's then the tone seemed 50's again.4. Having been born and raised in the plains of Colorado, I was eager to read this story but it didn't come close to adequately representing life there. Written from a city slicker transplant perspective.
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