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Title: Very awkward read and the illustrations disappointing
Review: I remember the tale of Peter Rabbit as a kid and wanted to getthe book to read to my daughter. I like the story, but didn't realize until I was adult how awkward it is written. Instead of writing "presently" over and over again, the author should just written in the present tense.I thought the illustrations were going to be vibrant and more modern. ...I was very disappointed when I received the book to find the illustrations were old fashion and drab. As a picture book I was expecting that my daughter could at least enjoy the cute illustrations, but this is not the case.
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