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Title: No payoff
Review: This book lacks essential pieces of a story. The world is beautiful and very well-described. Side characters are vibrant and catchy. Some scenes are even poignant.Yet the main character is a mess. There's no consistent motivation, nothing interesting about her, she's special for no reason, does stupid things that aggravate and annoy the reader instead of being understood, and she even is the reason for random flashbacks to why she's so special (this happens more than three times).B 3/4 of the story, you barely know what the villain wants, you have no idea why the main character is worth caring about, and no idea why it's about her instead of the more interesting ones.
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