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Title: My 6yr old brother could write better than this!
Review: I am twelve years old, and have written three fantasy books. I will admit, that the first one I wrote, was based off Tolkien, and inspired by him.But this, peice of crap? It was copied from Tolkien. Pathetic! It is filled with too many pointless descriptions that come out of the blue, only to drag you away from the rocky plot. It is barely a story, mostly descriptions, and the names are all tears away from Tolkien as well.Ayra:ArwenEragon: This is /too/ obvious.And Brom is obviously molded from Gandalf.The boy, is way to unoriganal and acts like he's fourty! Everything that happens is very stereotypcial, and I had to force myself to finish it. All that happens: He gets hurt, he gets better. I could guess what was going to happen next, everything was just a cheap twist from either Star Wars or Tolkien, so in closing:DOWN WITH CRAPPY FANTASY!
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