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Title: It just doesn't work
Review: I love Patti Berg. This story is different from her others, but that's okay. Writers should try new styles and plots. This one is darker and hotter than Ms. Berg's other books.But this one doesn't work. The story and the hero's background are VERY dark. To lighten this up and add humor, Ms. Berg adds a flakey heroine who wears almost no clothing and lots of hot sex.It doesn't work. Putting fluff on top of a dark plot doesn't lighten the plot. It's like putting whipped cream on meatloaf. That doesn't turn it into dessert, just makes it more obvious they don't fit. As for humor, there's very little.I gave it two stars instead of one for what it could have been.
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