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Title: Fell flat
Review: This is a re-read for me, originally read 11/2010.It was really painful to read. Although the attraction was written on the pages between Schyler and Veronica I just couldn't feel the chemistry when reading it. I also think the characters were written way beyond their years. Veronica was only 32, and Schyler 36 and he said things like:"I'm a man who believes in making people live up to their notices, and I've got a fistful of yours. You with me?"and"I go for a woman who has a hearty appetite and doesn't pick over the food. It doubles my pleasure in her company"I know this book was originally published in 2000, but I don't think women would go for these lines then or now. Veronica had some awful punchlines as well. The 2nd time around I tried really hard, but just couldn't force myself to finish this one. Too bad though, because the story had a lot of potential to be a really good love story.
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