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Title: writing improved, interest dropped
Review: i admit her writing has improved, but i wasn't interested in Jessica's problems at all. she seemed very cynical and always whined. plus, aar had stereotyped the typical loner, as cold hearted and feeling hatred against the world. aubrey sounded like a jock, while fala seemed to be the only character i was interested in. i give her one star for writing it and another for being published so young -- in the end that's the only reason she's being praised. her writing level is below average, i have seen better. this is pitiful and it's sad to see so many young writers look up to her.
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