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Title: A tough read...
Review: The first ten pages where great. Then she lost me. The weaving story structure left me with indiscernible characters lacking motivation for almost everything they did, and a shifting plot I could never get my head around. Toni leaves far too much for the reader to decipher, and this makes the read laborious and slow.There are several points in the book however where her talent cannot be denied. Unfortunately, I did not feel it was worth wading through two hundred or so other pages to find said points. She had the makings of another masterpiece if she had been a bit more patient and willing to bring focus to many of the fog-laden chapters.
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