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Title: Not remotely believable due to the author's ignorance about technology
Review: This story had possibilities, but when you see the glaring errors regarding computers, software, online bulletin boards and viruses - it completely destroys any credibility in the tale. And as mentioned by another reviewer, the tech part of the story seemed to be just stuck in there and went nowhere. I am not familiar with the travel industry, but even I could tell that the characters were not true to life regarding what would be expected of an actual tour agent; from the little I have seen of that job, there is no way that a person doing that job would have all the free time the author wrote into the story.It was bad enough that I removed it from my Kindle, and I won't be reading any more of this author's work.
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