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Title: Where is an editor when you need one???
Review: I expected this book to be light entertainment. However, I still expect storyline consistency. First of all, the boyfriend cannot have a 6 year old child in his 4th grade class. There are more "minor" errors, but hasn't anyone noticed the most glaring? At the end, the roomate is in two places due to storyline problems. First, the roomate was there, next shes still drunk, passed out in bed. This drives me nuts!
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