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Title: Good concept, flawed execution
Review: In this confusing, and verbose story, the basic idea (that this world is a shadow of another greater world) is good, the basic story line (a warrior who has to hide knowledge from himself to save the world) is good. The execution is mediocre at best. The story is deliberately confusing, and often meanders into laughably bad explanations of what's going on in the greater world. This type of story has been done better.
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