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Title: disapointed
Review: Couldn't get into this book. Basically a narration of the character telling the reader how everyone picks on her because she is blonde. Found myself skipping pages just to find dialogue between characters and that was quite short. Writing showed promise in that character almost came across as amusing, but fell just short. I did not even chuckle once and read several chapters. It was obvious from the beginning Jayne would end up with the Ranger. I was not willing to finish the book to prove myself correct. Less narrating and allowing the storyline/dialogue to make the story would have been better.
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