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Title: Decent Book... Annoying style problems
Review: JUST MY OPINION.....While I do find the content of the book enjoyable,it has been somewhat agitating to read because too many times in the book,a sentence lacks commas thus making it difficult to quickly and clearly understandwhat the sentence is trying to express.For Example: About three o'clock the quality of Wilson's incoherent muttering changed.While this one is pretty easy to understand, would it kill to put a comma between "o'clock" and "the"?So... "About three o'clock, the quality of Wilson's blah blah blah..."This is one of the hundreds of the problem in the book.Maybe it's just me, but this book could be a lot better with some copy-editing. Seriously.
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