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Title: whats with the chapters?
Review: first of all, I did like this book. the story line and characters of it anyway. it's just, JP is used to writing the adult thrillers or whatever and his approach at wiritng a teen novel doesn't come of exactly right. lets start with the dialogue. I don't know any kids that say all the wacky things that max and them sometimes say, the weird catch phrases or last words.what i want to know is, if a first time author who isn't known by the writing world (and JP is; he's pretty famous) wrote a book like this, with this writing style and layout, would this book be half as sucsessful as it is?And really, what is with the chapters? some of them cut off for no reason!I do like it, I just think it needs a few improvements. four stars.
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