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Title: Not too bad, but not too good.
Review: I liked the core idea of the book and the fast pace. The formatting could have been better, there were a lot of spots where the scene changed but there was no page transition, so it looked like one long garbled mess. The grammer and and sentance structure could use some work, but considering that English is not the author's first language it was not too bad, I have seen worse from native born speakers. Some of the characters seemed rather one dimensional and there was a great deal of development. Other than that I would say this was a good first effort from a new writer.
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