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Title: Disappointed
Review: The other reviewers have the plot summarized pretty well already, so I won't bother with that. My main problem with this book is the translation. It's horrible. The language is stilted and awkward. You can figure out what's going on, but there's no subtlety of phrase here and nothing like the English anyone actually speaks. In a story that rides alot upon the uke's inner-dialogue, this awkwardness of expression really makes it hard to relate to what he's feeling. This is also another title where the Uke stammers "NO" and "STOP" throughout the first time the main characters have sex. Why the publishers think quasi-non-con is the way to go with so many of these books, I'll never know. I know that if you're looking for English Yaoi you've got a limited number of titles from which to choose. This one should be a sort of last resort.
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