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Title: inconsistant plot
Review: This is an okay story, nothing great. It had a slow start, and I didn't think very detailed or indepth as far as the charecters go. I don't know if this is an editing issue, or how it was written, but my book seemed like it was out of order or missing stuff. A subplot would be finished, then it would start over and in another section a subplot was begun, but without any supporting information. It was confusing and frustrating. I don't think I would recommend this to anyone, but I am willing to give the author another chance.
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