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Title: Brother, Was This One Thrown Together
Review: Over the years, Griffin's Marine Corps books, which had been an very entertaining diversion, have become more and more slapdash. Poor character and plot development, silly dialog (especially the 5% that come from the mouths of females), mistakes, errors, and oversights.This one needs to be recalled by the publisher. At a minimum it requires more thought and better editing - from a grammatical and cultural standpoint. (Hey Mr/Ms Editor!! Learn the proper use of commas, semicolons, and, above all, apostrophes - they are NOT there for decoration!)But, we dumb bunnies continue to buy Griffin's books, so why should he care what he's writing? Until the demand dries up, he'll continue to laugh all the way to the bank.
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