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Title: Did anyone else notice these few things?
Review: Why didn't Ayla react to the revelation that Jondalar's Elan(clan?) is the tail of an ermine and that he has always liked the white tails with the little black tips? It just happens to be the very same thing that she used to decorate the white tunic she made for him. Remember when she was floored that she was going to be adopted into the Lion Hearth of the Lion Camp? Also that Jondalar has also been choosen by the Cave Lion, and has scars like her too?Speaking of the Cave Lion, Ayla appears to have forgotten him in this book, she hardly ever "prays" to it anymore.And why does Jondalar now get very upset around a dead body?He wasen't so neverous around Rydag or the two Sungaea children or Jetamio or Attaroa.Mabey Jean was so busy re-re-re-writing the Mother's Song that she didn't notice there few laps of the plot.
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