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Title: It had potential....
Review: I was intrigued by the description of this story, and when I started reading it, I got caught up in it fairly quickly. But then I started feeling like some of it wasn't explained very well. A story like this, which is obviously far-fetched, should have everything explained...but instead, much of it went without ever being clarified. For example, how can a community stop people from seeing color? How could they control the climate without some sort of border? How could they prevent other people from coming in? None of it was given any thought or explanation and it drove me crazy!I also HATED the ending. I got close and even commented to my husband that it was getting really good. And then bam, it was over. I agree with another post that said it seemed like the author got bored with writing the story and just decided to end it.I thought the idea behind the story was excellent and it would have made a really interesting read, but it simply wasn't developed enough. Disappointing.
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