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Title: Sounded great, didn't read that way
Review: The first few chapters I was hooked, then things went south. The sub-story line is in-depth maybe too in-depth. Seeing how this is the first in the Atlantis series I didn't feel like it did a good job of explaining a whole lot. I understood the main characters (hero and heroine), but the rest of Atlantis was just a mish-mosh of total confusion. So many species were explained, it was confusing, and the Dragon guardian in the Mist (it was a little corny). Truefully the whole book was a little corny. I did like the heroine; in fact I liked her more then the Hero. She was realistic at least. Unfortunately the whole book was lacking in real substance and felt like it was thrown together. The descriptions were lacking in every detail. Its not a real show case for the writer, if you want to see her best work check out the Lords of the Underworld series ( now that's substance).
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