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Title: A Confusing Mishmash
Review: Although I do give the author credit for being so young and publishing what must have been quite an undertaking, the end result is still a confusing mishmash of a fantasy story clearly written by a writer before his time. The main character expresses himself in some very illogical ways. Example: He gets "angry" at the blue stone he finds when it wakes him up one night. (????) If a blue stone was rolling around your bedroom, would your first reaction be anger at REM interruption or general surprise and shock? The rest is more of the same, added to an assembly of skin-deep characters and a propensity for utter, recurring, consistent, on-going, verbose adjective addiction in describing even the simplest thing.
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