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Title: Suspension of disbelief?
Review: If you are an adult considering reading this book, then don't bother (I did not know it was a kids book when I began reading it). It is a very poorly written story with zero suspension of disbelief. I only made it about 60 pages into the book before I couldn't take it anymore. Beyond the bad writing/dialog, I simply could not relate to a main character who is supposedly grieving beyond comprehension because her loved one was taken to be tortured and killed, but in route to rescue her she stops for a nap that turns into a slumber. After wasting all that time sleeping, she gets sidetracked again because she sees some kid who may be getting picked on that she has to stop to help... Really?? Loved one tortured and killed vs a kid maybe being picked on and you delay for that... Nice priorities! I'm sure it gets much worse than that, but that is where I had to stop.
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