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Title: Takes the wrong turn in guiding children
Review: Crots had a good idea, but I think she used the wrong methods to get the message across. Most of the pages tell about what "Daniel" doesn't do - or points out negative behavior. Why not make the message using positive behaviors? I think it would be more encouraging and more interesting if a more positive attitude were taken. For instance - "Daniel does not put his fingers in his mouth or up his nose." That spreads germs!" says Crots. True, but a little stomach turning in description.The wording isn't colorful enough to hold a small child's attention.
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