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Title: 2 and a half stars really. It was an okay story, but...
Review: I thought Ms. Rhodes had better character development with this story, and I admire her writing style, but I was disappointed with the story. I'm sorry to those who enjoyed it, but I didn't care much for the main character and didn't care whether she lived or died. I thought it unrealistic for Aubrey to fall for Jessica and be such a wimp in the story and sacrifice so much to save her when he's supposed to be this feared and mean character. I hope her third story is better than this one and has more believable actions by the characters. But keep writing, Amelia! I'm sure with time her writing will get better.
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