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Title: Needs work
Review: Based on the reviews, I was really excited about reading this book. However, I was greatly disappointed to see the plethora of grammatical errors, the fact that it is presented as a "stage play," and that it seems to lack professionalism. I commend the author on putting her story into words, and I'd recommend that she join a writing group, keep writing draft upon draft, and consider changing the format from stage play to memoir, as I think that's really what she wants to do but is perhaps afraid that it won't be taken seriously? Since it is presented in book format and not actually as a play, a memoir would be a much more organic platform.
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