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Title: Clunky.
Review: I bought this book for my son, who has two moms. While he likes it despite its faults, I find the verse too clunky and don't like the way the author beats you over the head with the two moms thing. I prefer books where two moms are just part of the story and not so explicitly explained. (Other books don't start out with, "Jason has a mommy and a daddy. Here they are--one mommy and one daddy. That makes two parents, one mommy, and one daddy." I don't need a lesbian version of that.)
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