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Title: Okay story, but writing style sophomoric
Review: Mr. Kirban has written an intersting story, but his writing style is so poor, it is distracting. As one reviewer pointed out, he switches grom first person to third person. What he didn't tell you is Mr. Kirban actually got so confused he began switching back and forth between the two, sometimes in the same paragraph. To his credit, I will say that some of his "prediction" about modern life were dead-on. You see, the book came out in 1970, but takes place in the year 2000. Mr. Kirban has space shuttles, laser weapons, as well as human cloning taking place.
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