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Title: Cute story but....
Review: the woman needs an editor who knows basic English grammar and punctuation. I'm not a stickler online, but in a published novel? The three errors on the second page alone were so distracting that I almost gave up.The young man who's been suspended from school for his computer hi-jinks and his holographic adventures with two older gentlemen are fresh and welcome additions to the salt-of-the-earth-folks-in-a-quaint-small-town genre. I hope that the author rounds out her main characters a bit more in future installments, because they have potential.
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