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Title: Too far-fetched
Review: As others have pointed out, this story is mostly a succession of hair-risingly unbelievable coincidences.Let me add that it includes a rather unappetizing make-out scene - God knows why! I have absolutely nothing against a female lead having a love interest, but it seems quite obvious that the author is not only inexperienced but also uncomfortable when it comes to writing love scenes. Oh well... Romance sells, I suppose, even if it's poorly written. The only good thing about the clumsy description is that we are spared the "insert tab A in slot B" part.The only plausible - and hence best - part of the story was the plotline about the old bones in the church, and that took up maybe 50 pages of the book.
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