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Title: Sorry, sarcastic reviewer has it right
Review: This premise was so cool, I really wanted this book to rock. As a Latina myself I was very excited about reading a fantasy based on my culture, not yet another medieval-esqu euro-fantasy. But I agree - it so did not deliver. She had good moments, but far too many dumb plot mistakes. It doesn't have to be Shakespeare, but it does need to be well-written, not with the kinds of holes a five-year-old can see through. You can almost see the book this could have been, and I am frustrated at how good it almost was and yet is so *very* not. Take another writing course, lady, you almost had it... but this embarassing book is not it
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