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Title: Had to put it down half-way through in disgust
Review: Think, Dan Brown meets Tom Clancy, add in an overdose of sub-plotting and beating the reader over the head with foreshadowing, then subtract any attempt at building characters. The result is unreadable, in my opinion. The chapter where the two ex-military types get a car by calling the company owner, and get a cherry-red Ferrari something-or-other, which one character ogles and the other's thoughts are "which might have been accompanied by seminal discharge, but [Payne] didn't want to check." I found myself rolling my eyes with increasing frequency, and ended in a place that's very rare for me - of no longer caring how the story ended.It gets one star for the plot having potential, but the story was poorly executed.
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