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Title: Could have used a Good Editing
Review: I have read read both the Blue Moon's, and Deathstalker as -well as- the Hawk & Fisher Trilogy, and I now regret every one, realizing years later that all of his books are lacking in something.What's that? Human nature. He takes great ideas, seemingly stealing them from other people, puts them down with a lot of flashes, gore, and catch-phrases -- and we the readers are supposed to squeal.Example? When a boy is hit and bruised repeatedly by a girl he's pursuing, he backs off. He doesn't smile and go after her again.This writer knows flash, but he doesn't know people. For better Fantasy, go to a writer who knows how people work, such as LeGuin, or Robert Heinlen, or Elizabeth Kerner. Don't waste time on trash that keeps you excited while reading and later leaves you empty.
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