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Title: Hamilton's wish fulfillment?
Review: Hamilton seems to have come down with Anne Rice syndrome. Extremely popular and selling well, so she decides she doesn't need an editor.Wrong! I lost track of the typos - sometimes three separate spellings of the same word on the same page. Is this minor? Yes, but it shows that not much care was taken with the manuscript - even down to using a spellchecker. Other people have mentioned the gaping plot threads; again, a good editor with the power to make suggestions can help resolve this.Much of the omni-present sex seems pointless. Okay, succubus line of vampires blah blah blah, but when the (previously strait-laced) heroine is banging every guy around and they're all blessed with enormous schlongs, that dives into the realm of Mary Kay fanfic.
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