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Title: Interesting subjects raised, but the story has logic problems.
Review: The story has a very interesting if not new theme of a dystopic planned society and the ending is deliberately open. Unfortunately, the story has logical problems that prove distracting to a reader thinking about the subjects raised, and therefore make you aware you are reading a constructed narrative.Better constructed stories on similar dystopic themes areThe Forgotten Door (Apple Paperbacks),Between Planets,Citizen of the Galaxy.
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