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Title: Wish I Ignored this Impulse
Review: While I have to admit the plot is more than interesting, everything else [stunk]. There are too many things that bothered me about this. First of all, when did the hero and heroine decide they loved each other; when he took her on the lawn or when he took her in the pool knowing what others would think when they found her panties? I understand the bad men being so aweful, but if he is supposed to be the good guy, how could he treat her just like they do? What the hell does she see in him anyways, ever? So what, he is great in bed. I guess it's up to us to assume they had qualities worth loving other than sex. Second, when and how did Rafeal's mother and Cocoa meet? How did they correspond without Mr. Meannie finding out? I don't think that was ever mentioned. I feel like I never got to know the characters, except for a little bit of history. This thing only deserves one star because the plot was good and interesting. Other than that, I didn't like it.
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