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Title: Poyner is tired of Commander Dan
Review: Like others, I've followed the exploits of Dan Lenson, also I share the feeling that character development around him is poor. Although we read to escape into another's fantasy, in this novel the inner workings on this outing are slim. Cdr. Lenson barely explores his inner self, although we're given hints that he may freeze with a panic reaction at the wrong time - then that line gets dropped. The ending is almost like "I've written my contract length, cut it off somehow." To save the ending, at the very least I think Cobie should get the Navy Cross. I come from a long Navy family tradition, even though I became a career Marine; I know how Cobie could do it.
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