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Title: Careless editing spoils a potentially interesting storyline
Review: Despite Kavanagh's credentials in the author notes, CAPABLE OF MURDER is poorly plotted with numerous misspellings and thousands of unneeded adverbs and adjectives that any student writer would know better than to use. Either the writer is careless or the editor was unqualified. This book reads like a badly written romance novel and lacks cohesion. Suddenly the heroine is driving a car in a rain storm but the reader is never told how she came to have a car. This will teach me never to buy a book by this author or this publisher again.
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