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Title: Jakesmom
Review: This could have been such a wonderful story. The author has a good grasp of what it is like to lose a husband dearly loved and the frustation and loneliness that is left. The character of Danny and what he does to save Dusty and her colt is well researched and authentic. He should have been the hero here.But where in the world did she find Ian? And he is supposed to be a minister? And he performs in a comedy club yet.What happened to Ellie? She is supposed to have alzheimers and yet is lucid at all times. So much more could have been done to show just what happens to those afflicted with this disorder.The end is not only comfusing, it's too simple and abrupt. We should have been given details of how she came to the conclusion that Ian was her choice.What started out to be such a good story just left me flat.
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