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Title: Good story...poor writing
Review: I am not a follower of Cussler's books...a friend gave me this as a gift. Cussler's plot suffers from poor writing and even poorer editing. Statements like "...win, or occasionally lose, which wasn't that often." make no sense. How does something like this make it past an editor's desk? Unnecessary words hinder textual flow. If you say "occasionally" you don't need "which wasn't that often". The book is full of this type of writing.If you are a fan...go ahead. If you are used to reading polished authors, you will be annoyed.
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