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Title: Where was Ms Smith's editor?
Review: First, this book is self indulgently long - her editor must have been afraid to ask her to cut some of the more boing bits. Second, the proofreader must have fallen asleep from the dullness - here are two examples of silly errors that should have been caught before going to press:p. 266 "specialist boutique that might have the cane with the carved handle which that Carlene had in mind." - obviously, ms smith didn't know whether to use "which" or "that" so put both in!p. 287 "to laugh at the expensive pretension of bussing down Kingsmen" - look it up, please, "bussing" means "kissing
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