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Title: Lots of loose end
Review: Coulter introduced a lot of characters, but failed to tie them together. There's the sheriff...what's her deal? Who was she really involved with and why? The old Chicago cop...he's just kind of thrown in there and written off at the end. The drug dealer...we never even met him! And, in typical Coulter fashion, she's got to throw in a little kinky sex stuff...but it made no sense to the plot.This book needed a strong editor, and a major rewrite. Just because you've got some bestsellers shouldn't let you get away with sloppy plots.
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