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Title: The Journey
Review: I agree with the other person who commented on Danielle's overuse of the word "and". Her run-on sentences are very annoying, but I can usually overlook them if I like the story. Of course, this is a very disturbing story, but that was not my main objection. It was the constant use of vulgar language. I truly believe she could have had just as effective a story without the use of language, especially by Maddy. Maybe the awful husband, but Maddy did not need to stoop to his level of speech. It changed her character when she began using his gutter language back to him.
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