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Title: Writing style is ok - plot is inconsistent
Review: There were several inconsistencies that I found in this book that made it hard for me to get into it. I don't usually pick apart Silhouette books but these were just too glaring.The heroine feels guilty about tricking the hero's father, starts to feel angry at the hero, and then the very same page is agreeing to continue the role with a smile, just because the hero says it's ok.**SPOILER** The heroine convinces a client that he has to stay with the company because of the hero's commitment to the company. Then in the very next encounter with the hero, he's learned the error of his ways and is going to sell the company. Oh, good going.All in all, the book was inconsistent but the writing itself did flow well. I would read another book by this author.
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