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Title: It's horrible.
Review: Really, the worst thing about the book is all the cheesy dialogue; the moment the story started with "Stop whoever is coming...or die" I knew I was in for a roller coaster ride of cliches. His writing and descriptions aren't impressive either. Writing 101: don't start every sentence in a paragraph with a pronoun, it's obnoxious, and trying to vary that up with time indicators (i.e: while, when, at that time, at that moment, in an instant), is unimaginative and mediocre. Yes, he's 17. So what? It's not impressive for a 17 year old to write like this, it would be impressive if a 12 year old wrote like this.
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