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Title: Nice plot, horrible writing
Review: What do you say when an author takes a good plot and mangles the execution?First, the research is falty. The author has no idea how the US would react to this type of threat. Has he nbever heard of AWACS?Second, the author seems to think more words are better. A little background is nice during a story, but why pad everything?Third, a black and white view of politicians is both childish and self-defeating. The author made the characters seem clueless in his voice over political tirades.Fourth, misplaced jargon makes the story ludicrous in places. How many English/Iranians use California pop expressions?Fifth, the dialog in general is pittiful. Words and phrases chosen for educated characters are weak, trite, and Bush league. (Sorry, could not resist.)
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