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Title: great idea, but grating read
Review: I give credit to the author for an interesting concept, but too bad she couldn't develop the story. It became so ridiculous and repetitive right from the start. The long run on sentences were laborious. The flowery language seemed forced and overstated. A good editor should have caught things like: "we COULD have cared less." I could go on and on, but since the author has already done that, I'll say no more.
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