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Title: Needed Editing
Review: This book has a lot of information, but much of it is extraneous to the subject and repeats throughout. Additionally, in an effort to be modest or 'i-less', I suppose, the author refers to himself in the second or third person exclusively, which is annoying by the end of the first chapter.This is a good book, with some gems of infomration, but it is opaque and you have to hunt for them. It could have been half as long without all the discursions and been an excellent book.
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