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Title: Message to Connie....
Review: Connie,in the book, one of the NDE characters is a Navy Veteran who cannot stop talking & rambling. Our heros, Joanna & Dr. Wright, are always trying to get him to shut up. And yet......this book rambles on and on about trivial things that do not add to the story. How many times do we need to hear about the confused map of the hospital or the cafeteria never being open. Good God, this 780 page book could have been a tight read at 200 pages.I'd go on with my scathing review, but then I'd be a hypocrite.One more thing: the purpose of this is to encourage you to be more succint in the future.Good luck.
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