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Title: Wetbones is all wet...
Review: For once I'd like to get through some of these fiction books without hitting reefs of mispellings and poorly constructed, if not artlessly incomplete, sentences. This book was filled with them, literally filled! That earns it a zero right there.The story tried to hold onto the base of Hinduistic mythology, tenuously at best. For instance, there was no clear explanation how or why Jeff's son got caught by this serial killer. And there is no valid explanation why this kid had a boyfriend from juvie who was willing to die for him -- not enough background was given for this Shawshank style buddy-buddy relationship at all. Nope. Not at all!Because the characters where poorly developed, the story earns another minus 5.Yet the story does have its strong dramatic points. Yet, if I were to write this story, then try to sell it, it would be kicked right back in my face.So, Johnny S., here's it back in your face. REJECTION SLIP NOTICE!
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