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Title: The leanness lifestyle - my opinion
Review: Way too wordy for me. Probably more suitable for people who already have no motivation. Just doesn't cut to the chase for those who already are committed to being fit. Just too full of fluff and talk, and hard to see through it all to what matters. A challenge for the Author: try and re-write it in 23 pages. It will be more concise (just get to the key points) and I'd probably buy it again to see if it is useful.
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