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Title: Poorly edited and horrible grammer
Review: This book needs a lot of basic editing. It is littered with conspicuous and outrageously bad syntax and grammer errors. Page after page I encountered missing periods, missing commas, run-on sentences, and awkward sentence structures. Frankly, I find this type of sloppy editing and writing to be intolerable.The author's premise for the book's primary story theme is based on his dream encounter with a ghostly Native American. He has this encounter after a late night coyote shooting spree with an AK-47. Besides being totally repulsed by the shooting incident I was struck by the utter amateurishness of the writing style.I am very interested in this period of history and, in particular, trying to educate myself on the Iroquois Confederacy. Unfortunately, this book was a waste of my time and money.
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