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Title: nope. you ruined it for me, mr. goldberg
Review: ok, i was with you when you threw me into the destruction and chaos without introducing the character. the struggle of the main character as he passed thru suffering drew me into his viewpoint. but the language...i can take in-character profanity and explosive reactions in difficult situations. but i had to discard the book when you introduced the ruffian companion with such degrading conversation. i want to be brought along with the story, not disgusted with mental pictures i don't need for entertainment. they added nothing, and took away from the impetus of the plot. i'm not sure who your targeted audience is with these unnecessary sexual references, but i think a lot of your readers should probably be warned!
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