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Title: Sloppy Editing
Review: Living in Albany, I settled down for a good read set in and near Albany NY. None of the characters were likeable, but the thing that made the book the most disjointed for me was reading things like, "He turned out of South Pearl Street, onto Delaware Avenue heading toward the expressway" or something like that. South Pearl is nowhere near Delaware Avenue. Anyone heard of Googlemap? There were quite a few scenes like that, that brought me up short and took me out of the rhythm of the writing. Something as simple as a map of Albany might have helped.
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