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Title: Couldn't Finish It
Review: I tried to understand what was going on in this book, but wasn't able to complete it. The storyline itself isn't bad, but the writing needs major improvement. There were unneeded descriptions, flat dialogue, and I couldn't relate to the one-dimensional characters. The writing was juvenile in nature and offered zero insight. My suggestion is that Wanda studies books written by successful authors to see what it is that makes their books engaging and also take some writing classes that will help strengthen her storytelling skills. That's the good thing: a so-so writer can always enhance and hone their skills and I believe that she can do it. Good luck with the next one.
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