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Title: Too Annoying!
Review: Like the other reviewers, I was irritated by the author's overuse of similes; and for me, they did seriously detract from my enjoyment of the story. This is a great little story; the characters and place are well done, and West makes you care about them. However, every time I would get drawn into the story, start to lose myself in it, here would come the avalanche of similes (some of them very bad)! Please, Mr. West, you are a good enough writer to do without this overload!
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