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Title: poorly written
Review: Thus far I've only made it to page 13 and I'm already distracted by the extremely poor writing. While Miller may have some compelling evidence and arguments to present, she has yet to master the basics of the English language. Every other sentence is followed by a sentence fragment ("White pushes ahead, the sailors following. Out of their element."), making it difficult to follow her line of thought. The paragraph structure is equally as choppy and distracting.I'm amazed that someone so educated could churn out a product which would receive an "F" in any high school history or English class and still be taken seriously as a scholar.What was the editor doing throughout the publication process?!?!?
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