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Title: Please - a good editor!?!
Review: Decent characters (if a bit predictable and trite by making them Lakota) good plot, decent writing but with foolish mistakes that stop the flow dead over and over. A coat turns into a cape mid-sentence; Sam is dealing blackjack in one book and "knows nothing about gambling" in the next, to mention just two out of so (so!) many. A good editor could clean these books up and the author would sell a lot more. Decent handling of the psychic with respect and insight. Such potential - please, get a good editor!
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