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Title: sidney is slipping
Review: A quick read but no real surprises. I was amazed at the number of errors which got by e.g a ship does not get under "weigh", it's "underway". He also confused Back Bay with Beacon Hill - no Bostonian would make such an error. The writing resembled a sixth grader's - surely the old subject-predicate, subject -predicate style can be improved upon.
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