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Title: Is there an editor in the house...anybody?
Review: I've discovered some great self-published ebooks but this is not one. I was in the Cayman Islands when I bought this because it was a prequel to the one set there and I was hoping for local color. Hmm. An entire novel in bold typeface without paragraph indentations? Really?! Has the author ever looked inside a REAL novel to see how it's done? Random line breaks galore, grammar-school level punctuation errors, dialogue that rings as true as an after school special, and a ho-hum narrative that tells, tells, tells. Vastly overpriced at 99 cents.
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