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Title: Annoying writing style
Review: This is my first time writing a book review; I am disappointed with this novel's writing and story-telling style. Every other sentence contains akward breaks and beginnings. The author's grammer is superfluous and non-varied. I am by no means an authority on writing, but this style just stuck out to me like a thorn. I guess the writing wouldn't have bothered me so much if the plot wasn't so boring. The book's premise promises to be a great thought-provoking story on society, cloning and the the relationships of the 3 main characters. The first half of the book is a VERY detailed, jumpy and slow reminiscence of their childhood. I was hoping for the characters to interact more with the outside world and to reflect how their lot in life is different from the non-cloned. Instead the book DWELLS on the love triangle and relationships of Ruth, Kathy and Tommy.I am sure others will find this book stimulating, but I couldn't even get myself to finish it.
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