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Title: A good start, but...
Review: I am hoping that the author improves with age. I was intrigued after reading the first few pages, but that early enthusiasm quickly turned to frustration. The awkward wording, the same descriptions of the territory, the often predictable dialouge from the characters. My husband and I read this aloud to each other -- I would have stopped reading halfway through if it hadn't been for my dear spouse's attitude of: "let's see this one through." Hoping for better things next time around.
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