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Title: A good page turner killed by author's writing
Review: The story was a very good one and i sympathize for Mr. Alpert, but I believe his ability to tell a story like this was killed by his personal pride and boastfulness. He has every right to be proud of himself for remembering details and catching the guys, and also of his law career, but it does not need to leak into the story. The writing style is very irritating because of it. It really sounds like a ten year old bragging to his parents about how he fended off the bullies on the playground.It IS a page-turner and very entertaining, but somehow I caught myself skimming the last few chapters of part two: Cat. I think it drags on through the lawyer stuff understandably.I would recommend this read to anyone. It is an extraordinary story that everyone, but a little under par in the writing section. But hey I guess he didn't get an English degree in college.
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