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Title: Funny read but
Review: it seems like the editing was a bit rushed. Not that this takes away from the story or the humour, but it can be annoying such as on page 108, when Sandi's name changes spelling. Okay, that's nit-picking, but the err is a wee more egregious when Ralph's Malibu (which is talked about through a good portion of the book) mysteriously turns into a truck in chapter eleven.Again; none of that should dismiss the book which, though sometimes the descriptive phrases can get a little tired and the slow the action, is funny and enjoyable. I read it in two shifts at work (security).Another job medium rare, Mr. Nelson!
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