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Title: lack of editing and focus swamps this book
Review: The writer paints upon such a broad canvas that the end result is an unfocused mishmash of people, places, and themes. Better editing would have netted a better reading experience. Read A Fine Balance by Rohinton Mistry if you want to read an author who can paint India with an exceedingly fine palette.
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