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Title: Good plot, Poor execution
Review: I was excited to read this story, the promo sounded fun and unusual. I was disappointed. The storyline is a fanciful, untypical, magical idea. Unfortunately, it wasn't told well. I couldn't bring myself the finish the book. It was very weak in character and scene development. The dialog was not interesting or engaging. I decided that it was a waste of my time to read it. I would like to see it re-written with much more creativity put into giving individuality to the characters and liveliness to the story.
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