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Title: Too repetitive
Review: This would have been a decent book if the author hadn't gone on and on and on and on about the same details over and over. This is obviously a self-published book which I don't suppose I have a problem with if the author had at least hired an editor. "common" instead of "C'mon" or "Come on". I didn't mind the reading through the first chapter how 'classy' the lead character was and how she was very careful to not have her picture in the society columns every week so she wouldn't 'wear out her welcome' and how her friends were incredibly jealous and didn't understand stepping away from the photographer BUT it is rammed down the readers throat in every. single. paragraph. I was even more frustrated when I got to the ending? What? It leaves you hanging in mid-sentence - or someone tore the page out of the back of my copy. Not good.
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