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Title: A bad story poorly written
Review: The first rule of writing in a journal style is that you have to make your writing sound like a person would actually write it in a journal. While a first-person narrative is often a great way to build tension and help the reader identify with the main character, the way this one is done is so un-natural it distracts from the story.The story itself is inconsistant and often consists of long, boring descriptions of unimportant details.As far as post-apocalyptic stories go, this one is not worth the time.
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