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Title: Only two boo-boos
Review: Cliff hanger story where you really like the characters. An interesting and compelling story. I wanted everyone to win, but well, read the book. The author made two mistakes. Kathy and Lester smoking in restaurants--doesn't happen in California. No smoking inside any public building. Be it the Hyatt Regency or Carl's Jr. People in the Bay Area NEVER "go to Frisco." You go "into The City". everyone automatically know you're going to SAN FRANCISCO. (Don't say Frisco...) OK I know that's picky, sorry. He did get the part right about tourist freezing in shorts and tank tops in The City.
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