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Title: This book needs an editor!
Review: This book reminds me of quite a few papers written at about 2 in the morning when I was in college. Although it definitely had potential, it comes off as more of a first draft than a final version. I found it painful to read a book where the author couldn't even keep the characters' names straight, much less construct well thought out sentences! Don't read this book unless you can stomach the often horrible writing which accompanies a sometimes interesting plot.
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