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Title: Fortune cookie say, "Have hernia in head to buy book"
Review: I love a good "who done it", and its even better if it adds a little humor. But come on! This story had more loose ends then a ball of yarn that my cat Socks just finished with. Tamar introduces a character and then they disappear. She starts a story line and then stops it. She uses more worn out phrases then 14 grandmothers at a AARP meeting. I did get a laugh here and there, but most of the story was spent trying to understand the lastest branch of her tree. a couple of the sub-characters are ok, the police chief never develops, her sister never develops and the deal with her husband already being married just lays there. Summing it up. A good idea for story line, too many weak characters, and too many side trips. I do have to say that a book is like a work of art, some people love it, some hate it and a few like myself would rather have had eggroll.
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