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Title: Get this man an editor!!!
Review: I've never been so annoyed while reading a Dean Koontz novel. Odd Thomas is completely unbelievable (we all suspend belief a little bit, but I can't do it THIS much...) and the way the narration goes on and on and on and on is absolutely astounding to me. Any entry level writing course advises to keep it short and simple. Descriptions don't have to be long and wordy to get the point across. The way he continuously over-describes almost everything in the book detracts from the story. Where the heck is his editor??
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