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Title: disappointing - poorly written - couldn't keep reading
Review: I love dragon sci-fi/fantasy so I picked this up when it was offered as a freebie and started it with excitement. What a disappointment. The bare bones outline is interesting but the writing is pathetic. I wouldn't want a grade school child to be exposed to this type of sentence structure. I had to give up on it and pick up other promising e-books instead. Written at the reading level of a third grader or lower.Examples:"Lady Oer had been preparing for a long time to find out where the Valley of Dragons was engrossed in devising a scheme to learn of its whereabouts""She disdained the family as inferior to her knowledge and power believing them to be lesser mortals to her she tossed her head at their entreaties."If this kindle version has already been extensively edited, I'm really glad I didn't see the initial copy!
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