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Title: This story goes nowhere
Review: I wanted to review this book because I enjoy a good non-fictionmystery. I was sorely disappointed by the first line. There were more adjectives in the first sentence than a text book. The author goes on and on to over-describe countless scenes, most making no sense with the previous one. He skips from thought to thought taking the reader on a roller coaster ride as you try and keep track of the happenings.At times I found myself wondering, what is he talking about? Manyparagraphs are long and sometimes run two or three thoughts together and you're left wondering, where did that come from?This story does not flow well and is cluttered with numerous typos and repeated words and phrases. I doubt even another edit could help this story.I'm afraid "The Man From Nowhere" is going nowhere fast. Too bad, the bases for this story seemed to have potential.I cannot recommend this book.Reviewed by Katharine L. Kroeker for The Coffee Cramp Reviews
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