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Title: Couldn't even finish reading it
Review: I rarely write anything negative but I had to this time for the sake of other readers. The book seemed written without a lot of thought or no outline - it just didn't flow or make much sense, had words spelled incorrectly, grammatical errors, and honestly it seems like no one reviewed it, edited it, or proofread it after it was written. The main character's reactions, comments, and behavior are over the top and ridiculous, there is no real character development or depth, the way the characters talk to each other is just silly, it's hard to really care about anyone in the book. Near the beginning of the book, one character meets another, then in the next couple pages, acts like he has no idea who the character he just met was! (something that could easily have been caught by an editor). I love this genre, and until this book, I have been thrilled with all the different authors whose books I've read. I couldn't even finish the book and that is almost unheard of for me!
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