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Title: Bleh!
Review: This plot of the book was good. Interesting, in the way the kids go from heaven to hell in a heartbeat. But the fact that Daisy falls in love with her cousin is desturbing. They sneak off and have sex in the barn in the daytime, and in their room at night. And Daisy likes the way he tastes because he smokes. That's just flat-out nasy.The other thing is the run-on sentences because they go on and on forever and take up whole paragraphs and half the time there's only two to three sentences on one page and there's no commas or any punctuation in them unless you count the periods and you end up getting confused and exasperated and distracted from reading because you're wondering when the sentence will end but it never does until the next page and then there's ANOTHER run-on sentence and see how annoying this is?The last thing I have a problem with is the dialogue. There is none. The author only describes what's being said. What happened to SHOW instead of TELL?Hence the "blech."
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