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Title: Too short and throws off everything
Review: Very good story, to say the nice thing first. Extremely too short. And it added confusion as to what the actual timeline is for things. The boundary goes up, Richard couldn't possibly have been concieved yet, Zedd intends to throw up the second boundary in a year, and it just doesnt make any sense that way. Is there something I am missing? Something I have forgotten? Something that makes it possible for Richard's mother to get old enough to be abducted and concieve him, AFTER the boundaries are all up? It's not making any sense this way. Very disenchanting.
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