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Title: Irritating to read
Review: It had potential to be a good book given the storyline, but where are the punctuation marks? I know the author was trying to establish a certain lyricism, but I think one can accomplish that with quotation marks. I had to read lines over and over, particularly after a long day at work. Additionally, it was "cut up." I personally do not enjoy books that shift from past to present throughout the entire book. Not a satisfying read for those wanting a smooth ride.
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