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Title: In dire need of an editor.
Review: A high school English teacher would probably give this a "C" at best - which is not what I'd expect of something I have to pay to read. The narrative is all over the place, with back story tossed in at random. When I have to re-read a paragraph to figure out which character is speaking, it's not a good sign. The story itself had potential, but even that seems spliced together from various well known examples of the genre. As it stands right now, this book has nothing to offer that you can't get more easily and enjoyably by re-reading an early Anita Blake book or watching "Underworld".
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