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Title: [Afraid of the Dark ]
Review: This is one of the WORST books I have ever read. What a waste of time! I can't believe another reviewer hasn't mentioned the ridiculous use of "And then..." at the end of almost every chapter yet. I felt as if I was reading a story written by a teenager. "And then" was probably used dozens of times in this book...totally not necessary.The story is not only lame, but NOT SCARY at all. [...]Editing? I don't think this book could have been edited. At one point Hank was talking about Ben and referred to him as Hank, his own name! And an editor would have removed all of the "And thens".[...] I kept on reading like a fool, thinking at one point it would get scary and make sense. Didn't happen! I can't believe this book was ever published!
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