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Title: Shows promise but sputters a bit
Review: The story premise shows promise. This needed more editing. The plotline gets blurred, the story is like an engine that skips and stalls. I like the world she has created. She did some interesting things, and it kept me interested enough to finish but there are places in it that just leave the reader to make some leaps of logic and fill in the blanks a bit too much.
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