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Title: Potential without execution
Review: Storyline -- 3 1/2 starsEditing -- 0 starsSpelling -- 5 stars --spellcheck works great, but can't fix word use!Word use -- 1 star-- way, way too many mis-used words. Break for brake, there for their, no for know, etc.Writing -- 1 1/2 stars -- stilted prose, stumbling sentences.Characters -- 2 stars -- okay development, way too much stereotyping (or profiling.)Overall, it's readable but barely. If you can't look past word use and grammatical errors go elsewhere.Mr. Stanfield GO FIND A GOOD EDITOR! Your story has a smidgen of potential but it needs some serious help as written. I gave you 2 stars because I did finish it and the story was okay. But, as written, even that might be a tad high. Find an editor. I'd look at another offering by you but if samples show the same issues I won't be back.
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