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Title: someone is upset....
Review: after reading "the vampire's heart" I hoped for another good read from mark, but was ultimately disappointed with this novel for several reasons. The most immediate was the lack of realistic dialogue. Another was the high use of repetition, which almost made it hard to read in sections...and yes, people esp. teens do repeat themselves...but the reader doesn't need to be bored to death with it. Mark has done some other notable work, but "someone" appeared lifeless. And i'm still pondering if a person can go from loving one person to another so swiftly as noted in this book.
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