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Title: Angst ridden and wordy
Review: I ordered this book because all the reviewers said it was wonderful. WHAT???!!! It was one of the most poorly written books I've ever read and I read alot. Throughout the book, the two main characters were so angst ridden that they became unlikeable instead of sympathetic. There was really no plot to the book. The writing seemed amateurish, when compared to other romance novelists, and the text was wordy instead of being succinct. The delivery room scene was a good example of this i.e.describing how many centimeters the heroines cervix had dialated. What did that add to the story? I hope Ms Stewart improves over the years and learns to tighten up her writing style.
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