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Title: Good storyline - bad presentation
Review: I agree with the reviewer who had issues with the grammar used in this series of books. My first grader brought this home for a book report and I was astounded to find intentional use of improper grammar. To sum it up the book is full of baby talk - which we do not tolerate. First graders are not consistant enough with their grammar skills to be assaulted with the very language parents and teachers are trying to get them to abandon through reading. And to make matters worse, at no point in the book did anyone correct Junie's improper language. I did find the plot lines simple, believable and entertaining. However, I believe there is a better way to present the stories without losing the content and wit.
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