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Title: I had it figured out on p. 72.
Review: While the idea behind this book is a good one, I think the author needs more practice in characterization. The main character is a strong woman in every aspect; she then falls apart when someone she doesn't even like is murdered. She is also way too dependent on her boyfriend. Her personality conflicts all over the place. It doesn't help that the criminal and motive are easily spotted on page 72.With a little more experience in writing complex plots and and characters, I think the author will develop into someone to look for
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