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Title: Disappointed
Review: I had never read a book by DS before. I got this book from a friend and after reading it, was very glad I did not pay for it. I found the story line to be too far out there and unbelievable. Everything seemed to happen to Coop all within months of each other; such as a gold digger says she is having Coop's baby and very soon afterward he finds out he has a full grown daughter he never knew of. Plus his devoted assistant of 20 years is leaving him during all of this to get married when he really needs her the most because he is going bankrupt. A truly caring assistant would hang in there a while longer to help get him through it. Not a lot of forethought went into the time lines. Also, I have never in my life seen so many sentences begin with "and" or "but". Ms. Steel's English teacher must be mortified. The only way I will ready another one of her books is if I get it free again.
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