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Title: it could have been good
Review: When I read the back of this book in the library, I thought it seemed great. When I started reading I quickly realized that no matter how good the plot was, the writing was going to make it a boring read. It was. Alot of fist person books only describes what is going on right then. This book tells both what is going on then, and little details that the character doesnt know yet at the time it is happening. For example, she says once what the kidnappers name is, but she adds that of course she didn't know that then. It just takes the excitement away.
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