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Title: Badly needs to be re-written
Review: The storyline is ok, but the obvious spelling and grammatical errors show that the manuscript was run through a spell-checker, and not proof-read before publication. The serious mistakes made in this book greatly detract from the story line as you have to continually mentally correct the numerous grammatical problems, creating a gross dis-service to the readerThis book needs to be recalled, re-written and re-published. I'm surprised that any bookstore would carry it, considering the serious problems it has.
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