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Title: Needs work
Review: I agree with much of what's posted here. This could have been a very good book with the help of an experienced co-author. Lots of action, and maybe it will be a best-seller. Best-seller and good have never travelled together much anyway.PARTIAL SPOILER FOLLOWS - SKIP IT IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW.The ending reminded me about the old Liars' Club story in which the teller describes being caught in a box canyon with a rattlesnake on one side, a mountain lion on the other, and a ticking time bomb just out of reach. He ends the story in a way that forces the question, "So what happened?" and replies, "Why, I died, of course!" Pfui.It's very easy to go astray with stories about cloning. I've read several, and the general result is usually a plot that degenerates into "No, you see, I made a copy of the copy and substituted ...." until the reader gives up.
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