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Title: It just didn't work
Review: I understand that this is a series and that there is already a sequel or two out on the market. So that means that someone out there liked this book. I am not that person. I read a lot of this type of novels, so I have a general idea what to look for. This book does has have action, but that isn't enough. The book is hard to read because I had trouble staying with the book. There are novels that once you start reading them, they flow and you find yourself caught up in them. This one is jerky in the action scenes. The characters don't mesh well in the story line. Maybe the second novel is smoother, but I am not sure I would want to read another one. Besides the ending of this novel seems to indicate that this will be a short series of books anyway.
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