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Title: Not quality material!!!
Review: This book was all over the place and just plain not what I expected. Especially after ready excellent books like Dutch and Dutch II. I think maybe because it was her first book the writing was kind of shakey. But I'm sure natives of Philly who read this book are going huh? The story of the infamous Junior Black Mafia was turned and twisted around horribly. Names of people just popped up all through out the book. You'll have to go back and read again to try to figure out who she's talking about. The way it was written is like the reader already knows who the character's are. Not! Ok so in the end Gena gets the money. But I got confused when Quadir asked her to marry him and he said her name as Janel Louis Scott. How did the name Gena come from that? Too many characters popping up out of place and uneccessary.
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