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Title: Expected more....was disappointed.
Review: Book dwelled too much on description of skin color, cars, clothing, etc. Should have worked harder on developing the characters. Although this was fiction, he could have made the characters more believable; only one that appeared real was "Ben". Maybe its just me, but I don't know too many young "Blacks" that have so much going for them at such a young age. Also, why did we need to know about Angela putting on her " rolex watch, diamond necklace, and boucheron perfum? Why all the put down on fat people and "brothers that were unattractive"? Maybe in time Mr. Basiden will become a great writer; its obvious now that all he is doing is trying to make a "buck". I guess there is nothing wrong with that, as long as you don't put others down in the process.
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