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Title: White said it best -- Omit unnecessary words
Review: The author has some good thoughts to communicate -- none of them original. But, he uses so many words to do it. And, he repeats them. And repeats them. And repeats them. Ad nauseam.Furthermore, he presents a smug God. I find that very unappealing!He is one of the most self-serving writers I have read in awhile. Reading this guy is like reading "a fine Hearst publication."Did the publisher employ an editor to review the work before printing? There are numerous grammatical errors.What he says is not new. Others have said it much better. Notably, Wayne Muller, in "Legacy of the Heart," deals with many of the same issues and other important ones. However, Muller writes with respect for the reader, no interest in self-promotion and with a good purpose for the use of the profits from the sale of his works.Friednship with God is not a new concept. It does not require a semantic battle to sell it.It only requires faith.
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