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Title: Room for improvement
Review: Poor editing aside, Shannon Holmes possibly could have a career as an author. B'more Careful presents a different world to the naive while glorifying it for those who live in this world or want to become a part of the drama that dealing drugs can lead to. A good writer researches the topic even if they feel they have lived through it. Not knowing how long it took Mr. Holmes to write his "novel," a little more time, with a little more rewriting would have resulted in a better product. Don't insult the reader's intelligence by thinking you have to spell everything out.
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