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Title: Pure T. Comedy
Review: Mr. Holmes you string together a jam-packed story. But please use some of your royalty earnings to buy a spellcheck program for your computer. Ebonics is one thing. Piss poor grammar is another. For example, Tina doesn't take "Zoloft" to cope with her son's funeral. She takes "Zorloff." Wassat?!? Hatreds aren't "deep seated". They're "deep seeded." People are "dumb founded" when they discover sheisty folks have been scheming behind their backs "all awhile." One of my favorite sentences: "That summed up Mimi in a nutshell, past being beautiful." A nutshell plus one? No such thing. The plot tries to gallop but the junky grammar adds weight, kept pulling me out of the story. If you're someone who actually knows how to read and likes to do so more than once or twice a year, you're going to have a hard time finishing this book. Feeling the plot, hating the vehicle.
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