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Title: Very disappointing.
Review: This book reads as though two different people wrote it - the first having more skill and discipline than the second. For 180 pages the author adequately sets up her post apocolyptic world, fleshes out the main character, and presents the dynamic situation that the main character is responsible to resolve. Then the meandering begins. At this point I felt as though I was riding with someone who had lost track of her destination. The all-important secret that motivates the main character's dangerous journey is unimaginative and disappointing. And the end of the story is so superficial and disjointed that it feels as though the author's deadline was moved up and she had to rush to finish.I felt as though this was an author's first attempt and that some professional guidance and much more time would have resulted in a story that actually has something to say.
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