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Title: What's the point???
Review: This novel is totally off base. It's like reading two-thirds of the novel with the last third missing. I know that David Sherman is developing the series but he's trying too hard to develop the world concepts and history in one book. It's almost like a pre-book in which it prepares the reader for the rest of the series. He's trying to grasp the magical elements and mixing to the military tradition but he's not doing a very good job. He should stick to the Starfist novels and concepts.
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