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Title: unforgivable inconsistencies
Review: This would be a great novel if there hadn't been the glaring plot hole in Chapter 3, when the Yellow Moon Owl is first introduced. I don't want to give too much away for those who haven't read it. It is still an interesting read...I would have given it a 4.5 or a 5.0 were it not for the Yellow Moon Owl inconsistency. But because of such an inexcusable flaw (which will rear its head later, starting in Chapter 9 and snowballing from there), I cannot give this book more than 2 stars. Mr. Dubus, I suggest you get either get a proofreader or concentrate more on doing your research on Yellow Moon Owls.
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