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Title: No More Kings Review
Review: I read the lyrics to the cartoon, "No More Kings." Most of the information was correct, but some wasn't. It's wonderful that your turning history into fun lyrics for children, it's just that it would be better if all the information was right. For example, there is a big time gap that confused me at first. The lyrics also say that, "They were missin' mother England" which they weren't. Another verse that was incorrect was when they said, "They planted corn you know." It wasn't entirely wrong though. They did plant corn, just not by themselves, the Indians helped them. The line, "They hoped to find a better home" could've been more specific. It would've been better if it said that they hoped to live in the Americas because that's what they wanted. Overall, I think it could've been more accurate.
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