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Title: Trite and pretentious.
Review: Jim LeCuyer's writing lacks versimilitude. He attempts to convey a sense of depth to his poetry, rather than write from his heart. The result is a series of poems that serve better as examples of decorated shallowness, or simply pretense.Specifically in his writing, LeCuyer abondons the use of proper grammar. While this is perfectlly acceptable for poetry, he makes no clear distinction that it is done for poetic effect.LeCuyer's excessive deluges into the pervesely erotic serve no purpose to the enhancement of the poem, but simply as shock value.Basically, LeCuyer's work lacks one true thing: honesty.
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