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Title: Not the greatest
Review: I stayed with this book, but I struggled to get through it. The point of view (POV)was hard to follow and I kept finding fault with the writing. The narrator writes scenes in first person POV, but they're scenes in which he wasn't present. He goes into detail about some things that don't move the story along, like what people ordered at a restaurant. There's definitely room for improvement where the writing is concerned. This takes away from what could have been a better story.
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