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Title: Hit and Miss
Review: I have to say that I loved Mace, a real hottie with a heart as good as gold. Alas, our heroine Becka comes off as a complete witch, who never has any faith in him and treats him like a stereotype. The author pumps up the sexual tension, hen leaves him and everyone else dangling, just because she blows hot and cold and really cold.The book starts out well and you can tell the author likes baseball a lot, but they deal with a lot of issues outside the couple, so much so that the couple's affair takes a back burner every single time to the latest crisis with the team.I would love to have seen a real development of character from both people. The near end of the relationhip was terrible-sensationalist rubbish, and if I had been Mace I would have just kept on walking away from her, because Becka sure wasn't worth it.
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