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Title: Outrageously Cumbersome to Read
Review: It's as if Morton had a bunch of trivia in bullet points and he put it all in sentence form. The reader is just bombarded with fact over fact.The sentence structure is painfully jumbled, which may make it sound smart, but is completely unnecessary.I have to read "To his French-Canadian followers, Laurier's ghost would be their guide to a successor." twice to make sure I understood what I was reading. Why couldn't he just rearrange it simply and say: "Laurier's ghost guided his French-Canadian followers to a successor"?
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