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Title: Needs a little more polish or a lot less editing
Review: Usually I can whip through an average size novel in two or three days. I found that I had to keep back tracking to find a connection between one thing and another and there were few connections. Call me stupid, but I think that there was too much missing or pulled out of the book to make us what; think? reflect? fill-in-the-blank?I'm not sorry I read it, I'm just sorry I had such high expectations.
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