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Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
Review: I don't want to beat a dead horse, but the grammatical errors and odd point-of-view shifts were so abundant in this book I almost put it down more than once. But since its an IR romance I pulled through.Unfortunately the book really doesn't get any better. The author made the heroine darn near perfect (multilingual, martial arts expert, blah blah blah). So much so why did she even need the hero? And why did I need to care about her?But then we were left hanging by the hero. His attraction to the heroine didn't seem all that defined. Of course she was different than anything he'd ever seen before but I didn't understand why he fell in love with her other than the fact that she was perfect.Considered how thick this book was there wasn't really any plot or conflict. And I felt left hanging on how the hero came forward in time.
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