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Title: Could use a little more structure...
Review: I'm disappointed with this novel. I found the main character implausible: his cyber-eyes are not very credible, and even the author seems to forget how they should work for dozens of pages. His work is even less plausible. The Collection Agency and the episode in which the main character does one of his "jobs" seems to just be an excuse to rant about the author's view on copyright. Lastly, the final part with the showdown against the main villain is more than a little confusing, and the evil-megacorporation-plot-against-everything-and everybody is cliched and, again, not very plausible, either on technical or social grounds. I suspect that the book was put together under some kind of pressure, and the various parts don't seem to fit well together.
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