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Title: Problems with the book's "anatomy"
Review: Girl Anatomy is a modern story about a hopeless romantic young woman seeking love in Los Angeles. Having heard about her best friend's pending nuptials, Lilly begins to analyze her past relationships.Despite some witty moments, Girl Anatomy is one of the sloppiest novels I have ever read. I couldn't determine whether the narration was present or past tense -- it goes back and forth. Also, I had a difficult time liking a twenty-four-year-old heroine who addresses men as "boys." I sometimes wondered if the novel was about a teenager disguised as an adult.Girl Anatomy has various elements of chick lit: the relationships, parties and witty dialogue between the characters. And the story itself is rather sweet. However, I wish the writing had been more coherent.
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