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Title: Disappointed
Review: I had never heard of Lori Foster before and reviews appealed to me. Unfortunately, I was disappointed. There was a great story line and some great scenes. There was enough character development to want more, to feel disappointed when the author would fall back on cliches and trite phrases. I couldn't understand why Gracie would allow her employer to abuse her verbally without walking away. When she did walk away from the job, she continued to take grief. I loved the fact that the heroine was not model thin and she did go after her dream guy. I'd like to read other books by Lori Foster as there was enough good writing in the book to make me think that she could be one of the best romance novelists. But she could benefit from a better editor as the grammatical mistakes were jarring.
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