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Title: A difficult read....
Review: I suppose the story is nice enough; but unless your name is Flannery or you're in love with someone of that name and like to read it over and over and over and over and over, you may find the author's use of it a bit tiresome. Six times in one paragraph in less than that many sentences? Surely there are many places where a pronoun would have fit much nicer, considering that you've already used the proper name so many times on that page already. I'd have to check out her next work in a bookstore where I could preview it before buying; I wouldn't have ever purchased this had I known what it was like to read. But then again, it was a penny book, so all I really paid for was shipping.
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