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Title: Beware beginnings...
Review: While agreeing with most of the critiques listed here - positions are demonstrated thoroughly via photography - I'd list one point of caution: the editing. The first 30 pages are a bit too preachy, and for the most part, not necessary. The subject matter is itself highly fragmented, drawing in buyers who are "pre-sold" on pilates and/or health. The trick for the reader is to allow no more than five minutes for reasons why, then get down to work. Work being participative and not being talked at.
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