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Title: Dissapointing
Review: Lee has learned some of the basics - get the reader's interest, make a character that the reader can like, get in some good scenery, some action, and some sex.What he didn't learn, however, was the rest of what makes a satisfying book. The main character doesn't grow or develop (we're *told* that he's changed, but he doesn't act any different), and he's whiney. He throws in sex scenes to plaster over plot holes/lack of plot development. Tehani is far more interesting than Hunter, but she's relegated to Sex Interest. And the ending...very disappointing.I wanted to red ink the whole thing and send it back to him. I wouldn't read it twice. This is a slapdash piece of work.
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