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Title: Get a better editor
Review: This is the most disjointed story I have ever read by Martin Cruz Smith. Was his editor on vacation or just asleep? What's with the telephone call to Eva and the taped soccer match? Give me a break. When I read the sample on my kindle it sounded like a great intrigue. Once I had paid and downloaded the total book I realized the story was going absolutely nowhere.I am chagrined to think I suggested this to a friend, who downloaded it but decided not to finish it.I feel cheated. Not out of money but out of a good story.
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