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Title: Great story, poorly written
Review: This is like someone took an amazing story and put it into a blender. The flashbacks and constant switching of timeframes is unnecessary and takes away from the story. I can see why this element is sometimes used, but it is not only not helpful here, it is distracting and overused. The other stories I've heard told about Norma are fascinating. This one could have been too, but the writing techniques used to deliver the story got in the way.
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