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Title: Not enough suspense!!! Beautiful eroticism, though.
Review: Read it as you would an erotic novel. Not as a typical drama or the suspense thriller that Mishima was trying to make. The ending was not a surprise. The build-up to the suspense was not enough. It lacked on various situations in between. The psychological mumbo jumbo that's usually involved in this genre of literature was way too indirect. If you're going to commit the crime, put more thought and brawn into it. I guess Mishima may have done that to show how naive and arrogant the boys in the story really were. Still, it needed more substance.
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