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Title: Needs more editing
Review: This book had the good story line, but the details were not there to support the plot. Suspense is not having the main character running around like a loose cannon never seeing farther than the end of her nose. I can't think what parts irritated me more, but the total incompetence of Sidney at times playing into the hands of the "bad guys" didn't cut it with me.
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