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Title: Feels False
Review: He should have ended the book without the silly musings at the end by Brony who is the author of the story within the story. We the readers know we are reading a book thats fictional, that is not true, so its lovely after having dedicated our time and energy to read your book and get lost in your world, you the writer pick an ending and stick to it rather than jolting us back to reality with , maybe I could have ended it this they live or maybe this way they died.
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