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Title: Strawberry Shortcake Murder
Review: Strawberry Shortcake Murder was the first of this series I have read. While I do appreciate the lack of graphic detail and foul language, it is by far the worst example of writing I have seen since reading my children's middle school attempts at creative writing. Who was the editor?? How did s/he let so many annoying overuses of both proper nouns and pronouns get into print? The author needs to work on writing in a more mature conversation style for her adults. The plot is okay, but the constant interfering of Hannah & others in an actual police investigation is not plausible. The author also needs to be more realistic in the day schedules of working people. Just for an example, a dentist wouldn't have time to go home in the middle of the day to process & print camera film.
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