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Title: A good editor might have saved this book.
Review: The book is full of idiomatic English not appropriate to the locale - an Irish author writing about locations in the United States. Further, there were numerous technical errors about the operation of firearms. Most notably in the climatic scene. The story line needed tightening. The author's writing has promise when not ruined by the jarring technical flaws.
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