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Title: Started out OK
Review: I'm not sure what happened. Both characters started out ok and then suddenly changed. The hero who supposedly is a nice guy and honorable turns out to be a liar who can't stand lies. And the heroine was strong but lost in fairytales, and suddenly becomes a pushover. Also, I found some parts so confusing with too many characters. And the numbers and some parts of the story don't add up. Hero's mother is 44 and was married at 15. Yet her son is 32. Doesn't add up. Also, the ending suspense bit was confusing and ended way too quickly with some hastily thrown in explanations. With some more work this could have been great.
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