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Title: This wasn't self-published?
Review: Ignoring the improbabilities of the plot, which have been covered by other reviewers, this book just wasn't edited, or even proofread, very well. Someone please explain to the author that "incredulous" does not mean "incredible." And take the thesaurus away from her! In places, it looked like she went through a list of synonyms simply to make her prose sound a little more interesting. Two stars because the plot had possibilities (I can suspend disbelief better than some reviewers I guess). It wasn't carried out very well. Glad I paid less than a buck!
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