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Title: Informative, but needs two spaces after the period. Really.
Review: William's "Little iMac Book" is friendly, informative, and well organized. I've been a Mac user since the "Fat Mac." My brother lives across the country and works as a musician: rather inept at anything slightly technical. He badly needed to get on the 'Net, so I gave him an iMac for Christmas. Expecting to hear gales of joy, I was disheartened when he got the thing and couldn't make it go. (No written documentation!) This book is written for him. Quality work, but I found William's insistence on using one space after a sentence very intrusive, and wish she would return to correct writing practice.
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