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Title: Needs new poetry
Review: This book was given to my children as a gift. Currently my toddler asks me to read it to her frequently. She likes the flaps, and likes to repeat "true" with me after it is repeated on each page.The "rhymes" in this book irritate me after a short time. Take for example this non-artful example: "Blue is for the rain that, well, just fell and fell and fell and fell." Please. I believe that children's books, especially books pertaining to God, should be beautiful in appearance and in sound. The clunky rhymes in this book are not beautiful. Each page also emphasizes an incorrect grammatical structure "...who God gave this special promise to." I try to avoid books that do this.The colors are nice, the unique design of the book is nice, but I'd prefer it to be re-written.
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