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Title: What the hell happens?
Review: I laughed a lot during the first act but that act was quickly worn out. Boredom set in as the first part of the story was told over and over again. The only thing that kept me going was to find out what this "something" was. Then I was treated to a couple lousy paragraphs of what could have been a pivotal moment but instead nothing came of it. Life continued as before- nothing changed when everything should have due to the fact that the central character kept telling us how on the edge he was. A good editor could trim this book down to 100 well written pages and push the author for another 400 to let us know what really happened. Too late now!
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