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Title: Disappointing!
Review: Ms. Malemes is quite obviously new to writing, and I expected much more from this book. The characters conflict with-not one another-but themselves! Dimitri, the male protagonist, swings between being macho and self sure, to a crying, sensitive, wonderful guy. The author needs to pick a personality type, and stick with it, and the same it true for almost every other character.I also thought this book very reduntant and repetitive, and I found myself skimming many times. There were long, drawn out descriptions of characters, and the overall writing style was very amatuer.And, upon closer inspection, the reader of this review will find the above two written by none other than the author herself.In future books, we, being my book group, hope Ms. Malemes will put a little more effort into her books, and perhaps read a few guides to professional writing. And get a better checker for spelling and grammatical errors.
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