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Title: Draggy prose or excessive introspection?
Review: The author has Lainey spending too much time revising her inner thoughts. There is excessive introspection, and her dialogs with the ghost woman seem really forced at times. Also, the side-story (her neighbor's affair) is distracting and quite frankly, a bit corny.Another point that annoyed me was Lainey's visit to the man whose wife was also in a coma. Lainey, who subtlety is portrayed as unselfish, borderline holy, passes some serious negative judgement on this guy. Why? Why jump on the moral high horse now?In summary: somewhere between contrition and a made for TV movie
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