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Title: DISAPPOINTING
Review: First, of all let, me say that the, book is riddled, with inappropriate, punctuation. It seems as if the book has gone through many lives. There are sentences that are written in the third person. (This is a first person novel). There are sentences that are in past tense and present tense and first and third person in the same sentence. Every sentence ends in an explanation point! The few scenes of action are completely unbelievable and far fetched. The subject matter is what drew me to the book, and I read the whole thing because I am interested in it, but, and I feel I must say this, it is one of the worst written books I have ever read (in its entirety). I don't understand how this got past an editor or a proofreader, as it surely could have benefitted from one, and it might have been a much better book.
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