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Title: Nice story, could have been better.
Review: The Fencing Master is a nicely conceived story, with a beginning,a middle and an end. Unfortunatley the middle comes about 90% of the way through the book, long after you've stopped looking for it. The ending is then too abrupt and the conflict not well developed enough. This could have been a great book. Truly great. But as it is, it is only okay. Great fencing scenes which make one want to learn how to do it. If only there were a fencing master of great quality around.
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