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Title: GUESS I MISSED THE BOAT
Review: I couldn't get past the first chapter. I found the writing trite and juvenistic with that name dropping laundry list type of writing aspiring writers have a tendency to use. Surprisingly this did not bother most of the people who placed their comments, but it truly bothered me.Like someone stated she is young and perhaps she will fine tune her skills as she goes along. I hope so. No doubt she feels a need to share her stories, but in that process she must give us something we really will enjoy.
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