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Title: Could have been better
Review: Spin State starts off great but then suffers from two major problems. Before I get to the problems, I want to say that the pros are great. The author has a nice writing style and was fun to read on that basis alone.But there were problems. First, there are too many characters and frequently a minor character will appear and the reader is like "who is Ramerez again?".Secondly, the tech in the story is not explained well. I honestly have to wonder if the book was edited in terms of content and and in terms of understandability. Towards the end a "World Mind" emerges which was not justified via the story or explained in terms of how it would emerge. I have to say that this almost made me laugh towards the end.
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