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Title: The Doldrums
Review: Did I miss something? I read every word, and found it all a big yawn. The writing is grammatically correct, but without any rhythm, not a single crescendo, completely devoid of climax. Rachel Carson? Please. I couldn't find a single hook in the anecdotes, not a compelling story within. Time after time, the stories and examples fell completely flat. Organizationally, the writer skipped around paragraph to paragraph without carrying any thought through a full chapter. The science was minimal at best, and just plain questionable at times. How did such a good premise turn out so dull? And what really got me was that I love the Outer Banks. Do yourself a favor; a textbook on wind will be more compelling.
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