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Title: Save Your Money
Review: Mr. Hall failed in his attempt to give the reader insight into the personalities and experiences of the Lewis & Clark team.The text jumped from one scene to another without any transition, it was difficult to follow when he changed subjects.When he was attempting to present the perspective of the American Indians he did not capitalize names and used minimal punctuation. This was confusing at best and often left me with no idea who or what he was talking about and how it all tied into the expedition. He may be an expert on all the various names which applied to each tribe. But most readers are not. It would have been helpful if he had used the commonly known tribal and individual names.In addition his use of profanity was unnecessary and got in the way of the story he was trying to tell.There are several really good books out there on the history and persons who made this journey. This one isn't one of them.
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