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Title: Poorly written sappy romance
Review: I'm all for the light gay coming of age novel, but this was just not up to the task. The book was poorly written with tons of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes -- at the very least the book was rushed to press without any editoral consideration. Many times during the telling of the story the author was telling the story from the wrong character's perspective. A paragraph would start with one character's name as the narrator and then switch mid-sentance to the voice of a character that was not even in the scene. It became very distracting.The prose was overly dramatic and squishy. All the conversations between two people was always prefaced with the characters name. For example, "Michael, would you like to go for a walk?" Johnathan asked. Michael said, "Johnathan, I'd love to." Yikes! It got tiring quickly.I'd definitely recommend against this book.
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