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Title: Overall, a good story, but...
Review: My biggest complaint, and this applies to this book in particular, in addition to works by other authors, is: if you're going to write "military science fiction," get the military details correct! Personally, I find it very distracting to the story when the details are incorrect.I think that most readers of military science fiction have some knowledge about weapons, etc. That's what makes this genre appeal to them. So, if you're going to have the characters using a very well-known weapon like the M-60, don't state that it's capable of firing "six thousand rounds per second," when its actual rate of fire is 500-600 rounds per minute. Don't have F-16 fighters (a USAF aircraft) flying from aircraft carriers (another of this author's books -- "Area 51").Do a little basic research into what you're writing about, so as no to distract the reader from the overall story.
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