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Title: I wanted to give more stars -- really I did
Review: I've enjoyed the rest of this series. The Dark Ones are a funny take on another as well known series that is mentioned by titled. The humor is cute as button, we have a herione that you would love to have to tea. A very short tea.Here's the problem. The characters don't seem to actually be IN the story. Our narrator seems to be narrating from four or five steps back and never quite clicks with anythingHumor is reached for, a little too hard - case in point - the mummies.This seems to have been dashed off to make a deadline or fill a contract, the real passion and fun in the other two books of this series are just not there.
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