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Title: Unpleasant
Review: Another vanity press book, pushed through without any editing whatsoever. A person can state that someone needs a better editor, but someone who intends to write for a living must have a better grasp of the English language themselves. There is a rather identifiable difference between minor errors and someone who clearly lacks a fundamental understanding of grammar, sentence structure, spelling, and sentence fluency. This is not intended to come across as an ad hominem attack, but as a statement of fact.An honest attempt to tell an interesting story is present, but it's lost beneath the unnecessary vulgarities, off-color humor, and again, the unacceptable writing quality of the story.
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