Negative Positive
Title: The Book is Ok
Review: The book, and the worlds created within the book are all very interesting. My major problem with this book is the colloquial language used throughout it that made the writing feel forced and just painful to read. I understand some "culture" is supposed to be infusing this book, but please the amount of slang used throughout this book is ridiculous and makes it difficult to get into the plot and enjoy the story. I really like the entire story line (though Carlos can get a bit much for me) but overall I enjoy the fantasy realms, but the forced slang used almost made me throw the book away.
Is the review positive or negative? 