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Title: Needs a strong editorial hand.
Review: As the protagonist makes his way across the dance floor of a club he detests, he treats the reader to all the dismal details of his miserable, debt-ridden, asocial life. Once he has completed the transit, he arrives at his table where his girlfriend waits. Then things really get bad. Although there is some interest in the scene where he confronts the demon cutting n on his date, one must wonder why this creature from hell bothers to recruit such a loser. Or why anyone should bother to read further.
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