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Title: Thankfully it was free!
Review: I downloaded this because of the time of year and well I was feeling in the mood for a chick lit story. The story was just about alright in that a child's wish for a dad for Christmas but that's where it ends being good I'm afraid. Unbelievable plot and then there were the mistakes, in one scene the hero was dark haired the rest of the scenes he was blond (Yeah maybe he coloured his hair, I'll give him that) but the lack of an editor was gaping in almost every page, very unprofessional. One line toward the end of the story and I quote: 'And hoped her parents were hurt by Kristen's reaction.' OK we have major issues so we'll forgive that. Another line was again niggling. 'Kyle drew up around her resting his and on her shoulder' I thought he was from America not the East end of London!!!If you want a read for free and couldn't care less for plot, character or mistakes then you'll enjoy it but if you want a good book to get lost in and read and enjoy then this is not it.
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