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Title: Did anyone else catch the holes in the story?
Review: I read this book over two years ago and I recall there were some holes in the story. The one that comes to mind has to do with Cannie's lesbian mother. At one point, Cannie tells us that she met Bruce at a party when she was doing an imitation of her mother's lover. However, at another point in the story, it makes it sound like Cannie was already with Bruce when her mother came out of the closet. That sort of poor editing really annoys me! I believe there were some other holes in the story, but I can't recall them now. The lesbian mother thing is the one that stuck with me.
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