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Title: Dime Store Novel
Review: While this book has a potentially interesting premise, it is illogicaly written (the bad guys are holding 160 US sailors in a prison, we aren't sure where - but lets crash in and shoot it up with the guards until we rescue the prisoners), (we need to rescue the hostages inside the captured embassey, so anyone who runs out we'll assume is a bad guy and shoot automatically), etc. Almost more embarrassing is the poor editing; Sea Knight helicopters become Sea King helicopters in the next paragraph, Major Mudodo becomes a Captain one paragraph later, the hero sends 'Bishop' to do something but 'Brown' reports back a few paragraphs later.
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