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Title: Just too implausible ...
Review: I thought the situation was interesting and the character development was good, but the villian in this story a vine that can lay traps, read minds, pick up things and move them around, and speak both english and german. I actually got pretty engossed in the story sometimes, but then suddenly the magic vine was mimicking one characters voice, saying exactly the things that would most likely cause conflict with another character, and I'd pop out of the story and think, "Oh, come on..."Another complaint is that early in the story, Eric is being lowered into a shaft and he sees a tunnel to the side that holds promise for escape. Apparently he forgets about it and its never mentioned in the story again.The story held a lot of promise, but now I feel that reading it was a waste of time.
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