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Title: So drawn in by the good reviews...but I couldn't even finish it.
Review: I do have to say that I am a lover of paranormal romance, so I'm always on the lookout for a good series. This one had such good reviews, it seemed like a no-brainer.The beginning began so rough, I felt like I almost had to take notes to understand what was going on. I kept thinking, "this is going to get better...this has got to get better, just keep reading." In the end, the grammar and the informal language (and the stupid names) bothered me so much, that I just couldn't muscle through it anymore. The "Brotherhood Vampires" are supposed to be older vampires, hundreds of years old--but their vocabulary is so bad and imformal, you never get that impression. The sex scenes are weird, without much ramp up.Anyway, I'm really upset that I spend money and time on this book.
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