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Title: Not so hot
Review: This book really could have used some editing. It seemed like there were good ideas behind it, but they weren't well executed. Some of the mechanisms the author used to move the story along made me roll my eyes and put the book down for a while (the worst would be the chapter of talking to the subconscious in a dream because he can't seem to figure things out any other way). I want to like these books, but they have so many problems that they make me cringe. He gets the second star only because I find the ideas interesting.
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