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Title: What's with the comma?
Review: I'm eager to find a gem among one of these self-published books, but if this guy doesn't know how to PUNCTUATE his own NAME I think I'll safely pass. I've seen people abuse commas before but sticking one in your name is ridiculous. And yes, that's all I need to see to never read this book.
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