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Title: good story, poor writing
Review: Sometimes I wish I never learned how to write romance, because it made me extra picky. But I think that even if I had read this back in the day, it still would have confused me.I liked the characters. The dialogue was good, too. But unfortunately, I had trouble keeping up with all the crazy head hopping that was taking place. We jump from each character's head to the other constantly, and sprinkled within were many little flash backs or allusions to things that happened in the past. (or very, very long explanations of things)I also didn't like how our hero's mistress seemed so nice and fond of him, that I felt sorry for her, knowing that by the end it wouldn't be she who would end up with the man.For an example of an excellently written regency, check out Jenna Jones, Elizabeth Fairchild, or Julia Quinn.
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