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Title: Forcing myself to finish it...
Review: I struggled through "First Impressions" but thought I'd give this one a chance. If I read one more reference to Jeanna's moo-moo, Elaina's knit pants or Ted's ponytail, I am going to scream. The storyline might have been salvaged with good editing but I think the editors did a sloppy job for White Smith. (Who uses the word "mellifluous" twice within 30 pages? Ack!) One sentence used the words "popped", "hopped" and "be-bopped" -- yes, all in one sentence. I felt like I was reading Dr. Seuss for a moment.I initially liked the author's idea for these books but there is no way I'm going to dish out cash for the other four books. It's too painful. I could have handled it if was just plain fluffy entertainment but I can't get past the bad writing/editing.I enjoyed White Smith's Seven Sisters series much more.
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