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Title: Run-on Sentences w/ too many commas, obnoxious names, Needs editing!
Review: The author writes in a way that is like swimming through thick seaweed. The sentences are run-on, too long, too many commas. The tense changes and it is annoying to read the "I walk down the hallway and I . . . then I pick up the phone . . . and I look around and I . . . . type of writing. Was the book edited? If so, the editor should be fired. I couldn't finish it or get half way though. And the names of the characters are annoying: Kimmer, Mischa, Maria, Bentley, Addison, etc. Gag!!! It is an exhausing style to read. Will sell on Ebay or Amazon and won't be reading his books again. I prefer Grisham's style. Crisp, short interesting sentences.
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