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Title: needs more drafts
Review: I thought this story needed to go through more drafts. The "conflicts" keeping the characters apart were unconvincing -- I kept thinking, "no one would act that way". This made it hard to sympathize with their plight. Similarly, the roadblocks in our hero's way -- such as being considered a suspect -- rested on completely irrational behavior by all (not that that's unbelievable for government agents, but still). The ultimate resolution of the "mystery" was a letdown. The info about the Big Hurrican itself was interesting.
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