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Title: This wasn't a novel, it was notes (and bad notes)
Review: I checked out this book from the library with anticipation of a good read, not a nuanced, deeply developed novel, but a good read. Instead, I read what should have been tossed in the slush pile. Cliche upon cliche first tripped me, but wait, suddenly I realized Melissa Banks wasn't writing chapters or developing characters. This was a sloppy journal of notes for a possible manuscript! What publishing house could feel proud of this? One only read page 267 "Neil and I stayed together for nights on end, lost of the Bermuda Triangle of Love" to see that this book is junk! My second favorite part was learning, in the last 20 or so pages, about the narrator's tragic lost love Chris.Melissa needs to go back to creative writing class.
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