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Title: The Graduation of Jake Moon
Review: This story takes place in eight grade in P.U University. This boy is going to grauduat from Middle School to High School. And moon had a sick gradfather Everything hey pen when somebody was setting in a chair front porch and everything was Dark. An by the end of October his hair started coming in thick.This story is Mostly about Eight grader Moon ho is going to graduate.One time his aunt had been boothing for his until he came and his aunt had told him to get inside the house but he dirent and his aunt got mad at him so she pulled over and stop the car and there were cars behind he and she dirent care so she stop until he got inside the car witch he dirent. And the Moon had his Graudation party and got his diploma and balloons he was happy.Thats end of the story.
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