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Review title: Disorganized, poorly edited
Product review: This is one of the most disorganized and poorly edited books Ihave ever read. There are sentences that get truncated from onepage to the next, concepts that supposedly will be explained "inthe next chapter" and never are, totally unrelated topics thatare jumbled together, material that is repeated without a clearreason, obscure and/or poor illustrations/photos, etc.Some radical editing could probably turn this book intosomething useful, but as is I would recommend that the beginningsailor turn to one of the many introductory books on sailingthat are better written and illustrated.
