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Review title: Great story - unimpressive sophomoric writing
Product review: I loved reading the story of how one organization/person is initiating change in a part of the world that sorely needs help. But, I had a hard time getting past the writing. Who was responsible for the number of times flight attendants on airplanes were referred to as "stewardesses?" Who calls them this anymore? People who are working for the betterment of women in this world? I think not.And I swear, one time the author used the word turd, to describe human waste left on the mountain. Unbelievably juvenile!I would imagine the subject of this inspiring story was simply too busy to properly review this book. And I would also hold any (was there?) editors responsible.
