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Review title: too many adverbs
Product review: I want so badly for this book to be good...But it was one of the most un-conversational books I've ever read. It's one over worded, adverb heavy, redundant phrased, run-on sentence after another. He crams two or three points into each sentence. But, yet, hence, of course, after all, obviously, however, quite simply get to the point! Why am I so annoyed by this book? Because he started a sentence with "Always, sometimes"! Did anyone edit this book?If McWhorter wants to communicate with more people, he needs to loose the chaff and learn to write. He is a smart person with great ideas. After reading "for all "extents" and purposes" I had so stop reading the book...good thing I borrowed it
