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Review title: Cries out for an editor
Product review: Starts off great - full of potential. Then declines into a real whine. Over & over again the "memory" keeps them separate & never resolves itself. Over & over we hear about how every slight ties back to that one event. I get it, I get it! Then, just when you think the book might wrap itself up in a pretty bow, you get to page 400 - yes, all the way there - and the editor falls asleep! The "memory keeper" lives his entire life with no one knowing his full name. One other (contrived) character knows this secret but no one tells the other main characters his full name. Yet, there is shows up on his head stone. Bah, humbug! Waste of money if they can't even get the editor to pay attention.
