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Review title: "Hawke"... a real clanger
Product review: The book "Hawke" by Ted Bell is a thrilling adventure novel. Sadly, the story was poorly edited. Research was really lacking in the novel and errors were so blatant that even average people who read thrillers but are not in the military could notice the mistakes. The word 'obviously' was obviously overused.In the end one painfully finishes the novel to see what other thriller cliche the author will use.You find yourself looking for errors because you bought the book,you want to finish it,you know the author must have done this on a dare,so you slog your way to the end. I hope Mr. Bell has got "write a novel" off his list of things to do in life because "buy a Bell novel" is sure off my list of things to do in life.
