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Review title: Not another spineless Harlequin heroine, please!
Product review: This story is exceedingly silly - BUT, it might have been a good read, if only the heroine hadn't given up her house, her job and her spine, just to marry the man who fathered her biological daughter. (She's got HIS biological child, due to a mix-up in the IVF clinic.) I could have accepted the marriage of convenience, so that they can each be close to their biological child (and there's the convenient fact that they are both madly attracted to each other). But the spineless and helpless heroine who dumps everything to do what the hero tells her, really annoyed me. The hero is not much to write home about either - he's a stiff, and too controlling, taking over the heroine too much (but then, she allows it.)If the author had only written stronger, more attractive characters, and given the reader a more reasonable give-n-take between them, this would have been a good quick romantic read. As it is, it's pretty poor.
