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Review title: 2 stars for content, 0 stars for poor writting.
Product review: Absolutely terrible. So many good points all jumbled up. It felt like it was written, by a grade 8 English student trying to impress a University crowd. The flow was difficult to grasp and the book lacked that finished up. Maybe she should have spent more time in editing. There were so many grammatical errors.Shira, really you can convey your message without vulgarity. Your book tries to cross the lines of financial insight and a smut paperback. Through a little sex in there and you got a Daniel Steel novel.Really people, there are so many better books out there with the same information in them. Try, Total Money Makeover by Dave Ramsey, or Your Money or Your life by Joe Dominguez. Save your hardback dollars for something a little more professional, and hey Shira please do another revision after you have spent about 6 months cleaning this SH!^ up as you would have put it...
