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Review title: Dear James:
Product review: I do for the most part like your books. I have read every one and like the best the Cross books. Your last book was ok but I would like to point out on page 257, I have never heard of a renfield 30-30. The only companies who made a 30-30 are Winchester and Marlin. What is a Remington 40.5? There is no gun of that caliber, and it's not even a caliber. Also there is no such gun as a {Glock Special 1990 issue.} There is a Glock 17, 19 and so on. Farther on in the book you write that Lindsay takes the safety off of her revolver, Revolvers don't have safeties.All in all you books are good but you need to do a little research on firearms, 10 minutes on the Internet and you could have everything you ever wanted to know about the subject. There are a lot of people who would read your books if you could get the firearm aspect right.
