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Review title: Choppy writing and non-existent transitions.
Product review: Three Moons Rising has an acceptable premise, but is very poorly executed. Never mind the over-abundance of commas and lousy grammar -- concentrate on the storytelling itself -- that says it all. The author lets the reader in on every character's thought, and beyond -- what's more commonly known as head-hopping. VERY annoying. Choppy sentences and non-existent transitions continually pull the reader out of the story.
