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Review title: A Kindle mess
Product review: This may well be a fine tale, but the number of errors are shocking. I would like to read this book, as I have just begun the first few chapters, but the errors of sentence beginnings out of context as well as the spelling mistakes rather ruins the charm the novel seems to hold. I can suspend my disbelief, but here is another tale ruined by dozens of errors. Don't you bother to proof any of your older books that you sell? As much as I enjoy most of my reading materials purchased through my Kindle, this sloppy transcription ruins the novel. If you don't care to proof your wares then you have no business selling them. Your author should be insulted! I am.
