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Review title: Un-edited stories
Product review: Please don't be fooled into buying this book. Even a cursory glance will tell you that the stories included in this anthology are not, in their present state, ready to be published. There is zero evidence to suggest that any editing has taken place, however loose one's definition of the word. I feel sorry for all the people who have submitted stories. What these authors need - what every aspiring writer needs - is constructive criticism, in order to improve. These writers' works should not be in print without serious revision. Ironically, the "editor"'s short story is the worst of the lot.
