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Review title: Who's On First- or Who Cares?
Product review: The worst thing about this book is the plot; the second is the lack of character development; and the last worst thing is the purple and predictable prose: "Hunger and the need for sleep dogged Cpl. Benaly;" "My yearning for escape had begun before we came here." Dead mean "stretch out like paving stones," etc.The plot is so disjointed (not that the changing point of view is difficult to follow) that some ground is covered over and over and other episodes comes without warning. Where does the baby come from before Deely has a baby? The parents have just lived in a boxcar, and suddenly the mother is attending committee meetings of the church social organization. This is an awful book, but I blame it on the editor, or lack of one.
