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Review title: I feel sorry for the writer!
Product review: I honestly feel sorry for the writer! It is so hard to get published and I know she probably had her whole heart in this project...However..I am an avid reader and it took me 3 weeks to read this book! The story jumps so bad that the reader can't get a grasp on where the writer is leading him/her. The end left me so lost that I thought maybe I lost pages out of the book somehow. I was extrememly disappointed and I am within the age group that some posters have put on here that are supposed to be able to "get" the book. Oh and the lack of editing was so annoying I put it down several times just because of it. That said..I hope the writer is given a second chance with another book to redeam herself. I think she has some talent but with her next book i think she should be more focused and include some answers in the final pages! Oh and stay away from the tweens and bloodlust..that was just sick! Those who read it know what I'm talking about!
