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Review title: the better ending
Product review: i thought this story was kinda cool but the endinjg kinda of stunk. I would have to say my most favorite parts is where the cops take martyn pig to the station and start questioning him about his dad and martyn wasnt doing a very great job in telling in answering the nquestion he thought he was so close to getting caught but what happen was well ill let u find out i would think a better ending would be with the cop coming ibnto the room and saying we know the truth martyn and ending it and having a sequal cus it would create suspense and alot of people would have bought the seconed part just to see what happens to martyn then u can end it again hwith suspense and alot of people would bve buying more and more of urj books so you would have gotten way more money than ending it how you did u need to create some suspense so people buy the next copy and that would have been the better ending
