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Review title: A very poorly written book
Product review: The "Author's Note" irritated me (check out the first and last sentences) and the first paragraph of the book irritated me even more. This goes beyond writing style or inventive wordplay ala Riddley Walker or Feersum Endjinn - Foy seems oblivious to the basic rules of grammar. After reading the first page I flipped through at random and it didn't get any better. This book got thrown across the room, then picked up and put in the bin. However judging by some of the other write-ups it contains some very good ideas. So read the first page - if this doesn't bug the **** out of you maybe you'll enjoy it.
