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Review title: What are you thinking?
Product review: Unlike most of the other reviewers here, I didn't find the jargon to be too distracting, even though I'm not in the internet business. What I did find to be distracting was the underdeveloped characters and plot and careless writing. It's true that "Eyeball Wars" is fast-paced, energetic, and exciting: in fact, I read the book very quickly and honestly enjoyed it. But in terms of craft, it was low on the totem pole: the characters were two-dimensional and difficult to like, and the plot was predictable. There was also an unpleasantly distinct air of mysogyny running throughout as well, and that certainly didn't help. I certainly wouldn't say it's any masterpiece of literature because of these glaring issues, but it did have its moments.
