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Review title: Strengths and Weaknesses
Product review: Barbara Watkins has developed some great bones, or outline, of a story. There's a good plot and stong external conflict. It just needs to be fleshed out.As a new author, she struggles with some of the same things we all have had to learn. There's a tendency to tell more than show, and there are some POV issues as well. A professional editor would have helped the read move along a little easier.My hat is off to any author who believes in their work and takes action to bring it to life. However, my opinion is that this book was published a little before it was ready. There's promise, though, and some deeper development would lead to a stronger presentation.
