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Review title: Read 2 Pages, Not edited, poorly written
Product review: I have only gotten through 2 pages and have encountered so many editing mistakes. It is written at a very low writing level. I will continue reading to see if the material is worth while, despite all the distractions.For example, a sentence that I ran into when I fist started reading was: "I'll get in may car to go to a place that I work, which is about an hour away in the next state, and not consciously remember anything that transpired between the time I pulled out of my driveway and into the parking lot of my destination."The sentence structure it very awkward to read and the "may" instead of "my" is something that editing would of caught. I got through a few pages and found so many of these.I tried to read more of this book but I don't think it has anything useful to offer. If you like to edit people's writing then go for it!I would recommend getting a different book.
