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Review title: A badly written mess
Product review: I live in Florida. I knew a lot about this case prior to reading this book. Not only was this book full of misleading information (Goths and Vampires are not one and the same) it tries to make Heather into some poor misguided little girl who never had any idea something was wrong. I can buy that peer pressure made this girl do what she did, but Jones never really explores that avenue. She goes from telling us that Heather thought this was all a goof to being a shell shocked, pathetic figure who can't figure how what's up. How did she get from one end of the spectrum to the other? Jones doesn't tell us.Almost every paragraph had a word or three in italics, Jones way of pointing out that this little bit of information was important. If her writing was better, she wouldn't need to highlight the important information by putting it in italics. She's also be able to give a deeper story into what happened instead of this shallow waste of time.
