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Review title: Great Story Falls Flat
Product review: The setting and story of The Birth of Venus were engaging enough, but the writing left me feeling flat. Too often the author used excessive adjectives and adverbs and melodramatic language rather than really making me understand the characters through their dialogue and action. The book seems a good first draft, and with some revision it could be a great novel, but as it is the characters are flat, uncomplicated stock characters, and the reading felt too plot based. I never really felt the complicated emotions of these characters and this setting, and though the plot pulled me forward, it was not a memorable read.
