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Review title: drags on with unnecessary descriptions
Product review: The premise of this book is great... and if perhaps every other paragraph was removed, this could be a great story. unfortunately, edwards jam packs the book with boring descriptions of sand and clothes and streets, the way wine is being poured, windows, voices, you get the point. everything imaginable is given ten times more page time than it deserves, making for a very distancing experience. it makes the tone melancholy and bland, nothing pops with excitement or draws you in.it's a pretty awful book, and i'm not sure why i'm making myself continue reading it.
