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Review title: just ok
Product review: while i really liked the message of the story and was very moved by it, i truly hated how it came to be revealed. sure, there is a bit of fantasy involved in this story--that didn't bother me. but as i noted already, it's the way this message is revealed so unneccesarily slowly as if the author was trying to build suspense that bothers me...also for such a short story, the chapter titles made me feel like i was reading a plot line with embellishments. i felt that they really ruined the simplicity of the story by chopping it up needlessly. the writing really rubbed me the wrong way.otherwise, it's a nice-ish story.
