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Review title: Bancroft-Strategy for Failure!
Product review: The sentences are confusing, in that you don't know where the main character is, or what is happening to him. Also, unnecessary blasphemy is offensive, juvenile, and shows no respect for the reader's beliefs, and sensitivities. It also shows a like of writing quality displayed in the older, more reverent authors, but is sorely lacking in today's writers. It's time authors learned to keep their anger, and rebellion to themselves, and not to offend their readership. Heck, if they were writing to the Islamic market, they'd be killed for this mistake! I on the other hand respectfully suggest that they keep their beliefs, or lack thereof to themselves, and to cleanup their writing style so as not to offend their readers!I Tossed this book in the garbage, after reading, not one, but several blasphemies in the prologue, itself!A note from a faithful reader; cleanup your writing style, and omit offensive language from your books!
