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Review title: Why aren't books edited anyone?
Product review: Repairman Jack, in the novel I just finished, grabbed a Stephen Hunter book to read in the airport. I checked Hunter out in Amazon and bough the first four Bob Lee Swagger books. They arrived yesterday evening. I am about halfway though the first one, Point of Impact, and ran across this interesting line on page 290:...the smell of dust and gas filled his ears...Why aren't books edited anyone? This is a Bantam book, not some fly-by-night, publish-on-demand company. I can ignore the grammar errors and comma splices, but this is so bad I laughed aloud and woke my wife. I'll heal, but I won't read this in bed anymore.
