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Review title: suffers from poor editing
Product review: The author hangs a confusing, convoluted plot on an environmental theme. The heroine is given pretentious past and there are so many subplots introduced and then dropped that the reader can lose track of developments. The book suffers from a lack of editing. There errors and cliches that could have been eliminated by a good editor. My favorite was the use of the word masseuse to describe a male, when the word should have been masseur. This error occurs several times.
