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Review title: The writing has a mythical sound
Product review: I have to take issue with a couple of reviewers who gave this book a lesser rating than mine. You can't slam an author based on the editing of her book. Take the time to look past the editing problems of a book and let yourself enjoy the compelling unfolding of the plot and characterizations. Granted, many people who are into gaming may not have the attention span to stay with a novel that is deeply plotted and well written. With games,(and I, too, enjoy them) it's the fast pacing of adventure following adventure following adventure that keeps the players interested and excited, rather than the love of words and word pictures that Readers love and celebrate.
