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Review title: Really bad writing
Product review: Was this book self-published? There must not have been an editor. There were several spelling errors and misused words. However, the worst part was the generally poor writing. A good editor might have saved this writer from writing about a little boy's blue plaid shirt while at the same time having him cry over the falling of the Twin Towers in New York. "He was wearing a blue plaid shirt." There are lots of short, choppy sentences and no realistic connection from one idea to the next. There are way too many examples like this.To top it all off, the Amazon description never mentions that there is a heavy religious element here. Lots of praying to God to solve it all. Perhaps a prayer for a good writing course would be more successful than this book.The upper grade teachers at my school will be using this book as an example of bad writing so that our students won't grow up to write this poorly.
