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Review title: More like an outline of a good story than a book.
Product review: Local Girls could be a meaningful story with plenty of quality characters and events, but the author is so brief and jumps from one event to the next in "outline form". I wish the author would have gotten more into the feelings of each girl as the events occurred. When the book was over I felt like I had read the book jacket and still needed the heart of the story.
