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Review title: Editor anyone?
Product review: I've read several books in this series (including the short story in Bite), I've given Hamilton more than a fair shot, but this is it. The plots are interesting. Jean-Claude is saucy, but it's not enough. The heroine is a self-righteous, self-absorbed hypocrite whose mouth should've gotten her killed by book two. My biggest issue is the writing itself. The grammar and sentence structure are atrocious and they don't get any better the further into the series you go. In fact, they get worse, and shame on Jove publishers for continuously overlooking these problems. I refuse to waste anymore of my money on Laurell K. Hamilton until she finds an editor. Vote against this review if you like, but if you've ever had an English class you know it's true. If you can't see it, take another English class. This is unacceptable.
