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Review title: Amazing story, but amazingly poorly written
Product review: This is an inspiring story, and the region and its people need to be understood by Americans. However, the writing was so horrific that it was hard to tease out the inspiration and meaning though the torturous prose. Somewhere near the middle of the book, it appears that the editor gave up with toning down the author, and my boredom and frustration increased with every page. It seemed that every page contained grammatically incorrect sentences. I think that if Mortenson himself would have told the story then we would have really grasped his humility without being told over and over how humble Greg was. It is too bad that the poor writing of this story prevented the reader from really getting to know the people central to the region.
