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Review title: Amateur Effort
Product review: I pulled this book up by mistake looking for another one and read a few pages. The reviews on this site were obviously written by the author's friends. This was written by someone who doesn't understand the fundamentals of writing. Her characters are flat and uninteresting and do not make you care about them. Nearly every sentence is destroyed by an over-abundance of adjectives. The story is choppy with poor transitions, and the author cannot seem to make up her mind if she's interested in teaching her belief system or telling a story. I would suggest she get some old books by Taylor Caldwell, such as "Great Lion of God" or "Dear and Glorious Physician" to research how a novel of this genre is handled by a great novelist.
