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Review title: Where's the editor?
Product review: This should have been a really interesting read, but it manages to fall on its face. Best I can tell, they rushed this one straight to press (probably to tie in with the movie), never bothering to pass it before an editor. The author often fails to tie his theories together, and frequently repeats entire paragraphs. Given a few more drafts and general tighting up, this might offer some interesting speculation, but what's on the page now is a mess!
