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Review title: what, where, who, what??????/
Product review: This "novel' is all over the place. Frankly, I'm shocked that it got published at all. Elaine is its only plausible character. The rest is just a kind of schzophrenic nightmare. The "house" itself doesn't appear until you're too tired to care and the jumping from one disjointed scene to the next is just exhausting. One of the most distinguishing features of great literature is that the reader is ALWAYS drawn into a compelling storyline. Whether it's "The invisible Man" or, say, "Dracula," the story and its characters successfully build on one another. The reader is drawn into the writer's imaginary world and carried away. I don't ever want to feel outside a piece of literature. I want to feel a part of the setting: the sounds, the light, the drama.
