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Review title: Back to the drawing board --
Product review: THREE MOONS RISING revolves around mysterious interlocking necklaces, blue water cats, barely believable fictional planets, and one man's determination to make "his" woman bend to his ways at any cost. If this is romance, give me a good murder mystery any day!When scenes involve both the hero and heroine together, their points of view shift back and forth so often, I felt like I was watching a tennis match. The hero also has no concept of romance, constantly trying to force himself upon the heroine, who can't understand why she has such a magnetic attraction to him. I couldn't understand it either.The book needs much more editing than it obviously was given. With more in-depth and believable, sympathetic characterization, this might have been at least a readable story. Smoother transitions between chapters and scene breaks are also needed. As it stands now, it didn't work for me on any level.
