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Review title: In need of some editorial care ...
Product review: While not lacking at all in imagination and fanciful storytelling, this first (and self-published) novel suffers from syntactical and stylistic problems which more careful editing would readily address. While I look forward to seeing how writer Crowell develops in his further TRUE ADVENTURES, I would just recommend that anyone who tries this book and enjoys it, should also try Patricia McKillip, Robin McKinley, Terry Brooks, and of course, Tolkien for similar stories, told by sublimely silken prose stylists.
