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Review title: Choppy and in need of a good editor
Product review: Previous reviewers have already outlined the plot of this novel, so I won't go over it again. Suffice to say that the story is distractingly difficult to follow because of a choppy plot development style and the truly annoying overuse of ellipses and em-dashes. Eliminating superfluous punctuation would have vastly improved this effort.
