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Review title: Not focused, riddled with too many cliches and platitudes
Product review: I am not sure what the premise of Masterdating is. This book has a split personality. The first third of Masterdating attempts, using gross generalizations and analogies, to offer dating advice to women. The second two thirds of the book is a strange mix of time worn cliches and new age philosophies. What is puzzling about Masterdating is the difference of tone and cadence between the two halves of the book. It reads like two separate books written by two separate authors. Perhaps a stronger edit can help the book find its one voice.
