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Review title: TOO MUCH OF EVERYTHING
Product review: Starts promisingly but meanders into subplots galore and peripheral characters that only distract the reader from the "point". Speaking of which, I think the point is to include every scrap of local color and historical data that Atkins compiled for the book. It's as if no detail is too extraneous to be omitted, and every notorious character of the period must be included. A little judicious editing would have been much appreciated.
