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Review title: LOVED THE BOOK on the second reading
Product review: Ms Chute writes what she knows, her life, and for one I neither condemn nor otherwise judge. On content, the book flies. I read from cover to cover.However, it is not a page-turner. I recommend that you read the second chapter twice or three times, before going on. Just to get to know the names of the characters and such. Seems like the characters changed names or characterazations between the beginning and the end. Some dropped out, and were never heard from again. Some appeared in a different guise. The author should concentrate on a few main characters from beginning to end. The message, the atmosphere and the characters would not suffer if some of the chaff was cut.In other words, the book is a great start for a beginning writer, but the book is in need of a good editor and an organized re-write. We would call this a "blog" today. But go ahead and buy it and read it anyway.
