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Review title: Too wordy and boring.
Product review: It is difficult to believe that the author of this book also wrote In the Country of the Blind. This book meanders around for what seems like forever and never seems to be going anywhere in particular. When I find myself reading only the first sentence of each paragraph, as I often did in this book, I know the pace of the story has fallen virtually to zero. If it was cut by one-half to two-thirds in length, it might move at a better pace. It also needs to focus on some interesting problem or conflict that a reader is interested in seeing resolved. The previous volume was somewhat better, but suffered similar problems. I gave it the benefit of the doubt in hopes that the second volume would get the story on track. Unfortunately, the trend seems to be in the opposite direction. I'll definitely pass on the third volume.
