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Review title: Just a few items
Product review: Rather than go into an in-depth review, I'll just make note of a couple of things that I found to detract from this book. Wambaugh notes that John Orr set a number of fires over a period of several years. A chart listing the fires and their dates (and, even better, a map of their locations) would have made the narrative much easier to follow, but alas there's nothing of the sort. I repeatedly found myself paging back through the book when Wambaugh mentioned a fire that had occurred months or years earlier. Photographs also would have helped. Wambaugh notes that Orr's completely ordinary, undistinguished appearance made it easier for him to escape notice when he set fires in occupied businesses. It would have been nice if we could have seen for ourselves. Finally, whenever Wambaugh refers to a vehicle making a U-turn - which he does incessantly - he uses the very annoying phrase "pulling a U-ee." Please, a little less slang would be appreciated.
