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Review title: GREAT STORY POORLY WRITTEN
Product review: This tale of Ezra and his efforts to keep his literary feet in both legitimate and 'illegitimate(?)' writing should be hilarious. The reader cares about Ezra and the premise of the story is funny and interesting - but the writer's propensity to write, to write repititious dialogue tired me out to the point I gave up in the middle, in the middle of the book. I have no interest in reading anything else by this author in case this IS his writing style. It's much like reading Mamet dialogue where, um, every word the character is to say, is to say is written. Works well for the spoken word, but not the written. Too bad, because I'd really like to know how the story ended!
