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Review title: Nice story, writing could be better
Product review: Wonderful story of life with a Balinese family, very atmospheric. The best part is the family that's depicted -- it's fun to see into family life like that, an entrance that many of us don't usually gain while travelling.That said, the writing could definitely have been better. Occasionally intrusive, occasionally pretentious, occasionally just clumsy, it sometimes really distracted from the reading experience. Also, it could have done with some good proof-reading; there are some irritating spelling mistakes.Despite that, I have to admit reading my copy enough times that it fell apart.
