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Review title: UNFULFILLING
Product review: I thought this book had a very good story topic, full of potential, but its awkward telling is so jarring that it's nearly impossible to read. What little descriptive character this book has seems out of place and forced. Its as if the editor of the book handed it back to Ms. Rice after reading it and told her to "...make it more descriptive..." which she tried to do by merely adding quasi-descriptive comments to the existing text without regard for transition or context values. In addition to this problem, the book suffers from a disjointed feel, as if it hasn't been outlined correctly. These are major failings in my opinion and made the reading of the book so distasteful that I couldn't finish it. In the future I hope that she and her editor are both in more professional frames of mind for her next book.
