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Review title: Did they have an editor?
Product review: I thought this would be a good book to bring on my first true vacation in years, but then found myself working so hard at reading it that I simply could not wait to get to the end. Though I'm not an editor, I would have taken a red pen to this best seller if there had been one in my rented condominium. Bad simile followed bad simile, and I kept referring back to the description of the author, who has won multiple awards, and has taught at what is perhaps the finest writing institution in this country. Greg Mortenson sounds like he is a kind man, with a true gift for outreach, but David Relin did a disservice to Greg's mission when writing this distracting book. Perhaps Mr. Relin's brilliance lies in his works of fiction, but if so, that is what he should stick to writing.
