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Review title: Hard to keep attention on story
Product review: I have read hundreds, perhaps thousands of romance novels. I have never had such a hard time reading a novel due to typographical errors and simply bad grammar. Where was the editorial control for this novel? The story was acceptable, but the dialogue was stilted. There was no examination of the characters' motivations or evolution towards intimacy. This novel needed a lot more editorial work before it was placed before the reading public.
