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Review title: snow falling on cedars
Product review: If this is the standard for a great novel nowadays, I know I'll never be able to write one. The novel is interesting to the end, and I think fairly balanced, giving the reader reason to understand the emotions of both sides and how they came about. However, it seems to me this author is overly concerned with the male sexual organ, in a few paragraphs, for some reason or another, without adding value to the story.Finally, this book would be an excellent Cliff Notes' candidate, as his descriptions and use of adjectives can easily be described as superfluous. This book, like many could easily be condensed. One misses nothing by merely glancing over whole paragraphs. It can also be seen, however, that the author spent a great deal of time on this work and and must have gone through many a draft to perfect his wording and plot. He is surely a very patient and gifted writer.
