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Review title: Good story, bad editing.
Product review: This is a good story; don't get me wrong! I hope Dorothy Kliewer will read this because she needs a NEW EDITOR! The editing on this very good story is unacceptable. As I said, the story is good; however, sometimes the language usage is stilted or unnatural for the character. In fact, I got so mixed up on who was who that I had to write down names & look back in the book to see who they were. Sometimes, characters appeared like I should have known who they were or I should have read the previous books! I strongly suggest she contact the editor for Laurie King, Nancy Atherton or John Grisham. At least, their editors know how to put the story together in a better & more readable way.
