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Review title: Needs editing
Product review: This novel was all over the place and in sorely need of editing. Some nice interepersonal twists but jeez, having to wade through so many irrelevant scenes and story lines...I skipped much of it. This was my first experience with this author and, frankly, I'm surprised about the raves from Linda Howard and Mary Balogh, two ladies that really know how to keep a story moving. This book needs major surgery - there is a story here, but getting to it is *work*.
