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Review title: Interesting Tale...Bad Editor
Product review: Raven by Michael MurrayI really enjoyed this book; I found it well worth the money for the hardcover. It seems well researched historically and is an interesting what if tale.I have a couple complaints, which I attribute to whoever edited the book (if anyone does edit with an iBook deal?):1 - There are jarring changes in location in the story, jumping from one string of the story to an other mid-paragraph which made me say "Huh!" go back and have to reread of a couple sentences or paragraphs.2 - Further, in the first section of the book, which is a modern day lead in to the past tale, there are several changes in the point of view. For example, the majority is in first person, then shifts to third person to explore his thoughts/state of mind.The bottom line is that this is a great tale, but expect to have to stop and figure out what's going on occasionally.Thanks, Ricci
