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Review title: Details are important, but.....
Product review: Number one, this book was TOO LONG. The plot was okay, but it was soooooo dragged out that by the time I got to the end I felt exhausted. Fifty-something chapters is just too much for a story with such a simple plot. I also felt like Jarvis' character was never fully developed, so I found myself disappointed when Venice didn't end up with Craig.The main problem I found with this novel was that there were just TOO MANY DETAILS. Details do enhance a novel, but there were so many tedious details that did nothing to advance the plot. Most of the sentences were choppy, and there were inumerable fragments.Ms. Lee seems like she could have a future as an author, but her writing needs much more polishing. I wish her the best of luck, and I would recommend this book if you're just looking for something to read to pass the time.
