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Review title: Big disappointment!
Product review: I generally can overlook Steele's run-on sentences and stereotypical characters, but in "Journey," the storyline is so weak and predictable, the grammatical issues simply jump out and scream at the reader. I mean, some of her sentences don't even make any sense, such as, "...he was still standing on the sidewalk walking as she drive off..." Huh? The characters are like formulas, and none are too likeable, either. Ridiculous story, unlikeable characters, and bad grammer. Geez.... I won't read Steele's work anymore, even when I am looking for a mindless read for the beach of pool...
