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Review title: Good story - bad editing
Product review: I'm a glutton for punishment I guess - once I start something I can't finish. This is a great story idea with interesting, and well thoughtout characters and plotlines. The writing style though leaves a lot to be desired. I highly doubt I'll be picking up any more of this authors books.There's a huge problem with the whole series - it's written as though each chapter was published in a monthly magazine. There's extensive review and repitition at the beginning of every character's section of a chapter. I first noticed this in the second book, and by the fourth, it's really become bothersome. A competent editor could have trimmed this repition out, and possibly delivered a much tighter story in 3 books.
