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Review title: Amateurish
Product review: I was disappointed by this book and think that other reviewers have been extremely kind in their assessment. As sweet as the plot is, the writing is amateurish. I just don't think it's all that well-written. It's nowhere near as good as Frankie Jones, Marianne Martin or Karin Kallmaker. Those women know how to craft good sentences, good paragraphs, well-directed chapters and overall intriguing plots. I' d have to know that McCann had actually gotten better (and there's some good advice from Litterati1 that she should heed) before I bought her next book.
