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Review title: Frayed writing, needs polish
Product review: I found this book to be the perfect example of a book whose time has not yet come. Perhaps the had no other recourse than to go to a "VANITY" publisher. It needs editing, for the plot is convoluted and entangled in non-linear ways. The characters are soft and hollow. There is no "fire" here. It reads as if the writer merely typed it. A headless torso, says this observer. No sale.
