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Review title: intriguing content and good plot development
Product review: This is a story that is probably closer to the truth than many could imagine. The author has developed a well laid out and very intriguing plot. The author undoubtedly knows well not only the Tanakh and Brit Chadasha, but a good, if not excellent grasp of Rabbinic literature, and the interesting nature of many experiences among Jews who have come to know Yeshua as HaMashiach. However, I found the use of frequent anti-semitic slurs quite offensive, even when it was supposedly in friendly banter; as well, I would have preferred the Jewish Believers using more Hebrew terminology instead of westernized Greek when referring to Hashem and their being brought to salvation. Probably the only aspect of this book that I'll seriously kvetch about is that this is still a manuscript which definitely needs a proofreader and editor. Perhaps, the problem is primarily "farchadat" publishing.
