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Review title: Good ideas, lackluster style.
Product review: I really wanted to like this novel. It's premise of a hard nosed, high tech protagonist in a future society layered with equally high tech and poly-moral antagonists (and aliens) promised a fun ride not unlike that of Neal Asher's Polity universe series. The great ideas and settings, however, did not make up for the disjointed writing style. Also, for some reason the punctuation in the kindle version seems completely messed up. There are way to many "." in any average sentence. If that was on purpose, then this author needs a punctuation lesson. If it is an error due to conversion to digital format, it needs to be fixed. Morgan needs to read a little Neal Asher to see how this kind of story is done right. However, I see tremendous potential.
