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Review title: Generally Good Advice
Product review: Very thoughtful read-- I thoroughly enjoyed hearing from such a respected editor as Williams about editing and overall style. Many of his suggestions are good ones, and the simplicity of his lessons are encouraging for timid writers.However, I don't agree with everything that Williams suggests. In his quest for clarity, Williams cites many writers of the past, some who could use clarity, and others that I strongly feel wrote merely with elegance and their own sense of style. Williams proceeds to edit examples from these writers' works, in the process losing the personality of the writing.This is one of the few flaws I found in his book, and overall I would recommend Style: Ten Lessons in Clarity and Grace to anyone who struggles for readable prose that doesn't sounds like something written by a twelve-year-old.
