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Review title: The story falls apart
Product review: This book started out with some promise. I agree with the other reviewer, the hero and herione didn't seem to really like each other. It was more like it was time to interject the love scene.The loose ends were neatly tied up at the end with a disappointing payoff. There was no emotional build up at all.The unrealistic points such as Maggie living alone at 23 or her being a ward of a family friend didn't bother me as much as the way they tied up the end of the book.
