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Review title: Ragged pages...
Product review: Verl is a somewhat believable character grossly miscast as some semi-interesting man out to solve a cold case. I pictured Barnaby Jones and got Bruce Dern. The tale holds promise and the writer should be lauded for her energy in delivering this book. But there is a clear reason why it is not published by a major publisher, and that is the downfall. The Ten Commandmands written on 25% cotten blend paper would not be the same as the Ten Commandmands written in stone. I would like to see this story handled by a good editor. A few paragraphs are superfluous and the tear-jerking parts are gratuitous. Nice try, but no banana...
