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Review title: There's No Substitute for Writing Skills
Product review: I feel bad saying anything critical about this book, since it's obviously written with love and care. But. . .it's also a testament to an important truth: even if you have a fascinating family, even if you have good stories to tell about them, even if you have an interesting (though not fully convincing) premise -- it's all for naught if you can't write. And Ms. O'Connell, bless her, really cannot. There are so many significant grammar errors, disorganized and under-developed paragraphs, confusing transitions, and badly-identified quotations that at times I simply could not follow the text. Even when the meaning was clear, the errors were such a distraction that I couldn't finish.And why do so few of the photos have captions? It would be helpful to have some names, dates, places, contexts.
