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Review title: Great book. But oversized
Product review: The book is very interesting. It teaches how to swim in the right way. And it tells, in plain language, why theoritcally the methods presented in this book are effective.However the book can be condensed. I would say half of the current size is more than enough to communicate all the essence. A book thicker than necessary wastes readers time and even confuses readers since the main points are diluted. Also many self-promoting paragraphs can be cut off. This is a book teaching how to swim, but not the history of swimming technique discoveries and evolutions.
