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Review title: Characters diminished by bad structure
Product review: The author obviously paid very high regard to the characters in her book. Her treatment of them all as sensitive souls shows her gentle approach to all of the book's mechanics and story development. This is what made this book so caring, yet so bland.I'll say harshly; Ms. Edwards should now return to academics of story structure basics and research skills, with a bit of grammar rules thrown in. I felt as if I was reading a draft, not a published piece.In addition to unnoticed skips during the edit process, there are many factual errors, as cited by other reviewers. One that surprised me was about the brochure and the art museum. The other is about bluebirds; Norah expresses concern about the future owners feeding them. Bluebirds don't take to feeders; they are insectivorous.
