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Review title: Great Story, Great Message, Poor Writing, Worse Editing
Product review: This really is an amazing story that needs to be told and a message that needs to be shared in the main-stream-media. The power of CAI's mission and Greg Mortenson's personal journey are enough to carry the poorly written and edited book through the end. The author turned a GREAT 200 page message into an often tedius 340 page history of Mr. Mortenson's personal life history and attempt at great literature while detracting from the main subject. Then to help things along, the editors flat missed several grammar, tense, and personal pronoun gaffs.I would recommend that anyone read this book, but I would also recommend that the author and publisher condense and re-edit for a second edition.By the way, the website for CAI where you can make donations is: http://www.ikat.org/. You can find it in the book if you look hard. I would sugest including this website on the front or back cover of the next edition too.
