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Review title: Doesn't Live Up to Potential
Product review: The story begins with potential about a farm girl that fears she won't be able to handle managing her family's farm when she gets older. However, the story structure is made up of almost issolated events in Kate's life so that the plot does not flow properly. There is more telling than showing in some places and some of the sentences are oddly worded, making it difficult to understand. The story is told in first person past tense, but in some places present tense is mixed in, contributing to difficult reading. I expected more and was disappointed.
