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Review title: boring
Product review: He does warn you it's his first story, fair enough (and kudos to him, other authors don't do this.) But couldn't he have edited it a little?It's all back story, description, telling (and telling and telling and telling.) We get it after the 1st repetition that his wife is drop dead beautiful. That they're both wonderful and perfect people w/o a flaw.Really, after the 1st hundred pages all we have is a man is missing under mysterious conditions. No action, no real plot, just lots of intrigue, more like a soap opera than thriller. Where's the mystery, the suspense, the thrill.Not sure if I'm going to finish. Already guessed the plot, and it's not pretty. Struggled with another 10 pages this morning . . .
