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Review title: Unfortunately this writer's not a good storyteller
Product review: The writer's father and other ancestors may be good writers or storytellers, but Saira Shah certainly isn't. This book is a unstructured enumeration of detailed events during the writer's travels to her home country, but it lacks to give the larger picture the reader is looking for. Events or stories described in the book sometimes just span 1 sentence or 1 paragraph. Everytime I asked myself: "what was the point of writing this ?". I was also hoping to get a better insinght in the regions past and present, and the book almost failed completely. It's arrogant to call this book "memoirs" when the writer was barely 35 or 40 (my best guess) when she wrote it. There's just not enough substance and the reader leaves the book with a great hunger. The editors have done a bad job coaching the writer and editing the book.
