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Review title: needs an editor
Product review: Unfortunately, this book was not the useful reference that I had hoped. The writing style and presentation of information are very disorganized at all levels, with many sections, subsections, paragraphs, and sentences that are out of place with respect to the topic under discussion. The first chapter is a (not so) great example. The same information may be repeated in multiple chapters. When I tried to refer back to a particular subsection or table, I found the desired passage to be very difficult to locate because it could have been in a chapter with an unrelated heading. A better Table of Contents is needed. There are typos and grammatical/punctuation errors throughout. The book needs very much the help of a professional editor. Lastly, the pages started to separate from the binding before I had even finished reading the book!
