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Review title: OK Premise - Reads like it is written by a 16 year old
Product review: This book is readable, but the writing is hackneyed and a bunch of the narrative elements are annoying. It has been years since I have read a book this poorly written, full of repetitive declaratory statements detailing the interior thoughts of the characters."Church felt bad because his girlfriend was dead." Seriously if you have to read slight variations on that sentence 20 times in the same book, it will drive you nuts.Also the same metaphors and similes are used over and over again. Finally all the elements dealing with any sexual tension or encounter seem gratuitous and extremely awkward. This book is poorly written and poorly edited.That being said, if you are looking for a brain dead beach read, or if you could care less about writing proficiency maybe you won't find this book as annoying as I did.
