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Review title: Grammar Lesson?
Product review: I had the opportunity to meet Mr. Crutcher and have him sign any book from a large selection available at the signing. I chose Staying Fat For Sarah Byrnes at random. The book started off well enough but I immediately was puzzled at some of the wording found within the text. Many sentences were quite awkward to read. My wife and I are both educators and were amazed at the poor sentence structure and vernacular used throughout. Many of the words I have never heard in the vocabulary of someone in their late teens (which is the age of the protagonist in the story). As the book wears on, Mr. Crutcher feels the need the raise the number of curse words per page. Seriously, in one particular chapter, the characters seems as if they have just discovered the word s***. The storyline about friendships changing as peer groups and personas evolve is a familiar, but welcome one. My fault is not with the "message" but the way the message is delivered.
