Title: What's with all of the fragmented sentences?
Review: The story seemed to have a good plot, but I found it very difficult reading because of all of the incomplete, fragmented sentences. As far as grammar goes, this is one of the poorest works I have ever seen.A fragmented sentence is OK to use once in a while, but Michael Gruber uses them excessively, especially when detailing Jane Doe's thoughts and actions. I counted 35 fragmented sentences on one page.Trying to figure out what Jane Doe was thinking was like trying to translate with someone who has a limited understanding of the English language, and making sense out of fragmented gibberish.This book may as well have been written in Pig Latin. It would have been easier to read.
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