Title: Lacks editing
Review: This reads like a first draft sloppily written to meet a deadline-- it needs some major revisions and added depth.I just cant get into a book written for "grown-ups" that's riddled with lines like: "The cappuccino machine- an early wedding present from my chief exectuive- shouts a shiny hello from its corner on the kitchen worktop..."Shouts a shiny hello????? Shiny Hello brought to you by the Letter S? These silly lines belong in a kiddie book!
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