Title: slow dialogue
Review: The plot appeared interesting, but I found the dialogue too slow. You read what the heroine and hero are thinking and then they say it aloud to each other. And they tend to think the same thoughts again and again and again without adding anything to the plot or character.Bordering on insanity is their lust. Right in the middle of being chased by thugs with guns, and they're climbing down the fire escape, they still have time to feel each other out and fantasize, really amazing.What also got tiring was how she kept trying to keep him out of her troubles by running away from him in the middle of being chased. When is she going to get smart enough to realize it's too late to 'keep him out of it' when they both have been id and chased already?? The book does not make her appear smart at all.
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