Title: Pity--it could have been good.
Review: Some interesting ideas unfortunately combined with failure to explore them or even consistently bear them in mind during world building and plot construction. Lumps of awkward exposition, especially near the beginning, are interwoven with a Mary Sue story written for adolescent males. Plenty of 2nd amendment propaganda, but no mention of the 13th, 15th or 19th amendments, which would actually have applied to the situation. Basic facts about the real world (which serves as history for the story-world) are conveniently forgotten or overlooked.If you are a militaristic fifteen year old boy, you'll probably like it. Otherwise, there are better ways to spend your time.
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