Title: Needs an editor
Review: Reads like a first draft. Although there might be a good story worth telling within its pages, A Face in the Moon is overloaded with long drawn-out dialogue that slows the forward motion and details that don't contribute to the story. Waldman has a gift for describing visual nuances and characters gestures and body language, but this book could be half as long and be better for it.
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