Title: Contrived
Review: If the writer stuck to the first three story lines this would have gotten a better rating. Unfortunately the middle sections, where everything 'came together' seemed contrived at best. I skimmed over the Korean ultra-capitalist section. It seemed to have some promise but was cut short. The Hawaii section at the end of human kind would have been interesting if the dialect the writer tried to use wasn't so obtuse. A half a page of 'dialect' is hard to read, dozens are not worth the effort.
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