Title: Confusing, hard to follow...
Review: The blurb as well as the front drawing caught my attention so I borrowed this book from our local library. For the most part, it is entertaining but as I get deeper into the story, suspending disbelief is becoming harder and you get the sense the book is written haphazardly. For example: Madoc, the hero, lectured the Calusa men the bad things their Chief had done to them. How could Madoc know the village's history when he just arrived that day? And Cougar, the Native American heroine, and the Welsh sailors understanding each other well after less than half a day of meeting for the very first time? There are paragraphs after paragraphs when I asked myself, "What happened to this, to that? I still want to know the ending of this story but I do not usually take more than two weeks to read a book of fiction.
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