Title: Author needs a Master of the English language
Review: I am with the other reviewer. The synopse on the back of the book was better written than the ENTIRE book. If I could have given it zero stars I would have.The book had a plot that while albeitly far-fetched, caught my attention and sounded interesting to me as a reader of erotic fiction and especially BDSM fiction.Sadly, the utter lack of editing, poor language choice and spelling and grammatical errors made this book a nightmare to read.How many times can a person use the word "Ummmm" to express sexual pleasure. It made me nauseous.It was so bad, I couldnt get past the errors to lose myself in the story and I am really unsure how anyone else could, unless this is the state to which our english language has deteriorated.I seriously debated writing to the publishing company and offering my services as an editor, thats how distracting the grammatical errors and poor writing were.I will NOT be buying another book by this author.
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