Title: Void of substance and throughly unrealistic
Review: I will give the author the benefit of the doubt, because making the switch from playwright to fiction author is very difficult, however, Every thing about this story was totally unrealistic. One would assume that to choose a subject like AIDS, one must have something to say, or some kind of commentary to make. She made none. Ava was as passive about her disease as if she had the flu. Some aspects of the story had over explination, while most didn't have nearly enough. Her concepts did not flow in one seemless motion, they were broken and sporatic. I had met Eddie in a hundred other books before this one. It was cliche, predictable and a chore to read. The characters were underdeveloped. This is a much longer story that the author made it. With some pratice however, she just might make a significant literary contribution.
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