Title: Entertaining, but poorly written
Review: This story was very cute. I only wish the author would have taken the time to have it proofread and edited. It is full of incomplete sentences, run-on sentences, typos, and poor sentence structure throughout. It also lacks fluidity. She seems to intend to bring the story to the reader chronologically, however in one chapter she turns eight and in a later chapter she is seven again. Despite the difficulty I had with the writing, I was interested enough in the story to finish it.
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