Title: Dismal, Clumsy, Unedited, Self-Published -- save your $$$
Review: I trully had high hopes for this book, having seen the reviews, and the back cover. I thought it a bit odd that it wasn't in any local libraries. Now I understand why. This book is the second worst book I've ever attempted to read. One that genuinly disappointed me. I wanted and expected it to be good.This book was published at a self-publishing house. With all the punctuation errors, it was obviously not edited for copy--let alone content.In this book, Dialogue is so unnatural as to be very distracting. While the plot may have potential (I don't know, I had to put it down to repackage it for a return), the prose was so clumsy that I couldn't get past page 50. Multiple points of view in one scene (1st person mixed with 3rd person omniscient). Good grief...Mr. Mariotti, stick with your business-related articles and non-fiction book...until you learn the craft of writing fiction.
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