Title: Gratuitous Sex Dialog is Clumsy and Starkly Out of Place
Review: Patterson is a very talented writer but starting on page one are these occasionally gratuitous, sex vignettes that are clumsy and starkly out of place. They read as if the publisher told him... "OK,.......we need to draw in the Romance Novel crowd, throw in some sex".Sex is great but the segments in Consumption are grittingly out of place and not edited well. Kevin, you didn't need to stoop to their marketing ploys. You are too talented of a writer for that.
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