Title: Too much silliness and triteness
Review: When I got to this sentence: "Emma looked down at her own waistline and noted that despite her love of breads of any type, she managed to keep a trim figure", I closed the book for good. Puh-leaze. Is that the best we can get with character development? I couldn't get any farther. What does it take to find a good, engrossing storyline?
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