Title: Misses the mark
Review: The premise has promise, but 2 things really prevented me from getting into the story.1) For me, what works, humor-wise, in a story is having a ridiculous/funny situation and a rational protagonist who must find her way through the crazy situations. In this story, ridiculous situations arise again and again (perhaps situations that are a bit too ridiculous and a bit too frequent) and the main character seemed to become caught up in the flow and have no reaction. This undercut a lot of the humor for me and made the story transition from funny to exasperating.2) Generalization, generalization, and more generalizations.
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