Title: Not a Miracle!
Review: I love Ben Schrank's writing, and his intent. The book starts out very promising, and the reader soon becomes interested in the main character, Martin Kelly Minter, and his life. Many questions are brought up in the early chapters which we hope to learn more about later in the story. In the later chapters, however, rather than answer these questions, and tie the concepts together, Schrank leaves too many loose ends. He changes the entire story in the middle, and what started as a refreshingly real look at a young man's life, soon becomes a non-realistic rambling story. This book could have been planned a lot better, and seems like an unnecessarily elongated short story, which should have ended about 250 pages earlier than it did. I hope that in the future, Mr. Schrank can use his talented writing style to write a coherent novel that keeps the readers interest from beginning to end.
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