Title: Only a few lucid sections
Review: This book had so much potential, but clearly needed a good editor to organize the author's scrambled thoughts. The reader has to work really hard to keep up with who's narrating, with the focus sometimes changing mid-paragraph, or even mid-sentence. The lucid sections were vivid and fabulous, but sadly were few and far between. I want to read a good story, without having to decipher the product of a spoiled author and a lazy editor.
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