Title: needs serious editing!!
Review: Ugh. This book needs some serious editing. There may be an interesting story in there and the concept is good, but it's painful to get through it. A good editor could easily cut out half the pages. There's so many times where the book reads like someone's daily account of activities - got up, took a shower, got dressed, doorbell rang, etc. Stuff that adds nothing what so ever to the story. As a result, the characters are pretty flat. If you need something to help you pass a lot of time or you like crappy chik-lit, then read it. Otherwise - leave this one on the shelf.
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