Title: disappointed
Review: I really liked the first book and was looking forward to the second one. This book's writing was choppier than the first which I forgave for growing pains and a first book. How many times can a person say "dang?" I just think of some teenager going "dddaaaaaaaang." And the dialogue is awkward. When she says he has a "nice butt"? Not funny. And do "singles bars" really exist anymore? The plot, however, moved fast, and the scenes with Abby's "magick" and Ophelia's psychic crime solving were good.
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