Title: Egad, what bad writing!
Review: She can tell a good story, but she's writing too fast. Third person voice? Passive verbs? Past tense from start to finish and ALWAYS inside the guy's head. However, I didn't really get disgusted until I read, "...homespun wooden cradle.." What? Homespun is fabric -- what idiot editor let that one slip through? Because of this error and other really dumb actions, like driving a coach through a dark night on frontier dirt roads makes it obvious that neither she nor her editors know anything about the era. And, it would seem they don't really care about their reader's intelligence either.
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