Title: Waste of money and time - very disappointing story
Review: Based on the reviews, I purchased this story and another story by the same author. In both stories, the author seems to have supreme difficulty developing her characters. The characters aren't particularly likable or believable. Fortunately, they are pretty well swallowed up by the gaping chasms in the plot.I didn't believe that the main characters really cared for each other at all. The hero only really seems to care about embarrassing the heroine, showing her what she is doing wrong, making her jealous, and driving her out of "his" house. The heroine spends her time cleaning a house that might not belong to her, neglecting her brother, and envying her rather rude cousin. The author would have been better off omitting the profuse details of cleaning a neglected estate and focusing on developing her characters.
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