Title: not much of a novel!
Review: great combat descriptions, really. but this work is too fragmentary. stuff happens, then something quite else, then the story takes a turn when it should be moving forward. drake should have made this into short stories. then it might have worked. not the fight in the end though, which somehow doesn't seem to fit in. this is like a warning to fantasy writers: sometimes you shouls make a short story, not a novel. this didn't really seem lie a novel to me. some of the things that happened and how they happened seem weird
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