Title: Story OK, but needs professional editing.
Review: The story seemed to be decent, but was difficult to read due to all the typos and other errors that don't get caught by a spell check. It was frequently difficult to determine which character was speaking dialogue and there was at least one instance where the author called one of his heroes by the wrong name. If he can't keep the characters straight how can a reader? There were several minor characters whose names changed spelling from one page to the next.Jim, if you ever write another book, hire a pro to edit it!
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