Title: Editing is your friend.
Review: Dear author of "Stars Over Stars",Have you considered having your work edited? I have been reading it in two-chapter increments, and I was still very much annoyed by the endless repeated of the folowing points:1. Fleck smell.2. Laka are pieceful.3. Heyoka has "Other" inside of him, that is not human.4. Heyoka feels guilty for Mitsu.5. Heyoka feels guilty for not interfacing furballs into the military better.6. Mitsu is crazy.7. Mitsu has been a prisoner of Fleck and cannot take it again.8. Male laka are naive.9. Heyoka can't blueshift.10. The firballs do not deal with human discipline.11. The firballs challenge/ do not challenge/ think about challenging.Seriously, it was very annoying.No love,Me.
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