Title: Allmost, but not quite
Review: Granville, West Virginia falls through a "plot hole" into 17th Century Europe in the middle of the 30 years war. The book deals with the 3000 people in town and what they do when they get there. I found the "Cheerleader turned sniper" annoying and less than believable as a cheerleader cheering when new allies arrive in town. There were several "sub-plots" that should have either been dropped, or given more attention for example some out of town wedding guests "imported" to be advarsies almost dismissed for the rest of the book, they are a problem, but a very minor one. Which leads me to the bigest problem I had with the book none of their problems were "major". Every battle they fought was very one sided. And some other battles they were concerned with, they should have been able to open a history and figure out who will win. This could be a good "first" book, but it doesn't do as well by itself.
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