Title: Sophmorish style but engaging story.
Product review: Kudos to Maurice Gray for writing this novel. I commend him for weaving his faith into this engaging story.My favorite aspect of the book was the portrayal of a black male who is celebrate as a result of his faith and biblical obedience. He was a beautiful character to follow.As creative feedback, the writing style really needed help. There was just WAY TOO MUCH going on in this story and much of it (including the characters) so unbelievable. The slang use was awkward and there were several grammatical errors. I read this book because my 20-year "little sister" told me it was "one of the best books she had ever read." I only finished it because I wanted to be able to discuss it with her. I have to admit, it was a really choppy read for me.Maurice, my advice to you is to KEEP WRITING (and get a good editor!) The more you write, the better your writing will become. Obviously, a lot of people have really been touched by your novel. May God bless your efforts!
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