Title: The first one was better
Product review: I really can't understand all of these great reviews. I mean, the book was so poorly written, it had to be rushed. I made it a third of the way through and I couldn't take it anymore. I just kept hoping it would get better, but it didn't.The dialog in particular, was awful. People just don't talk to each other like that. And I know writers struggle with ways to tell the reader technical background while at the same time working it into the story, but this writer doesn't even try. And the characters, I didn't care about any of them. And why should I? They weren't believable, their back stories were far-fetched beyond belief. Did I mention the inane dialog?The first book was a good read, not great writing, but still enjoyable. This one was painful and embarrassing.
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