Title: Borderline novel
Product review: This is a good story but poor in the telling. Ms. Baldwin was trying for a "stream of consciousness" effect but the end result were too many run-on's (complete sentences within each other) and lack of references (too many places where you don't know to whom or what she is referring). Confusing. Where was her editor?More than that, however, were a lack of definitions (a glossary, perhaps) for the innumerable Indian words and a detailed map of the whole of India. Not least, the author assumes the reader has at least a working knowledge of Indian mythology.Too bad, as the subject deserves a hearing.
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