Title: Twice as good at half the length.
Product review: I couldn't believe it. They crossed the same desert 3 times and the author didn't even skip forward over the odd week or two. It was like reading about the solution of a "Towers of Hanoi" puzzle. The author put a lot of imagination and creativity into this story but needs a good editor.
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