Title: Grand verbosity
Product review: This book is way to verbose. Aggressive editing is sorely needed. I'd guess that the book could be about one third of it's current size without missing a thing. This is the first book where i've skipped pages several times. If it was a library book, i would return it after some 200 pages.I liked The Reality Dysfunction -- the thickness was justified by interesting subplots. The fact that humanity had acually evolved was a nice change from most sci-fi too.This book does not stand out in any such way. It's not the worst book i've read, and i will probably read the sequel too (but not if the story doesn't end there!), but i would not have read it if i knew about the fat.Short story: buy some other book
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