Title: WTF was he thinking here?
Product review: I really wanted to like this. I even read it a second time and I still felt like something was edited out as it's disjointed and missing something to make the story workable. There's some parts that are good but the lingering thought remains that it's either too long or not long enough.Satire? The joke fell flat.Parody? It's not clear what it's mocking. "Reality TV" is too easy.Feel free to disagree but the ending and the characters aren't compelling. I also read his first novel afterwards and I liked that but wondered what went wrong with this effort.
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