Title: Couldn't hold my attention....plot/dialogue is blah
Product review: Contemporary romance isn't my usual fare (I prefer romantic historicals), but after reading a pretty good Foster story in one of the anthologies, I figured I'd give this a try. Wrong! The writing is certainly 'dumbed down' and dialogue is absolutely ridiculous. And don't get me started on the plot. A supposedly gorgeous actor practically has to beg the mousey heroine to have sex with him? Yeah right! The love scenes are awkwardly written as well. The brother is a complete idiot. The best friend is the only one I cared about. She was interesting, but her romantic story line was left hanging -obviously setting up a sequel. ARGH! I maybe tempted to get that one out of sheer curiosity. This one just left me blank.
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