Title: Good story gets better
Product review: I agree that the story is told better in the second book. In the first book, I liked the idea, but thought the execution just never got pulled off. The idea of animals being made smarter, humans being made more animalistic and what effects that would have on our world are fascinating. But the first book had long boring stretches for me that made it hard to read and push through.The second book flows much better. We finally get to explore more of the mysterious Wyvern. And I agree there is plenty more there to explore! We still have not seen the active lab there! So I also say bring on book three!My only real gripe was the "do over". I would have had the "do over" erased later in the car scene, instead of only frightening us with it. The paradox fixing itself.Loved the sideways world. I think the time travel added a lot to the second story.Good read.
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