Title: Too bad the writing wasn't better
Product review: I wanted to like this book, I really did, but couldn't get past the 2nd chapter. The story line sounded so promising but the writing was so amateurish I just couldn't continue on.The writer hasn't learned to "show, don't tell" and uses very simplistic explanations of character motivations. Everything felt contrived. I get the impression this is a first writing attempt by a very passionate fan. Lots of enthusiasm for the subject but not enough skill to back it up.
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