Title: Descriptive writing?
Product review: I had high hopes for this book, but I, too, was very disappointed. I did manage to struggle through til the end, although I did begin to "skim" especially through all the room, office, people, etc descriptions....Oh my GOSH!! I liked the overall story line, but was extremely disappointed in the writing -- very amateur. Could have easily been condensed into a not so 'wordy' book and been just as effective. I also agree that dropping the F-bomb and other foul or degrading language (ta-ta's? are you kidding me?) only degraded the book further. Sorry, but I certainly would not recommend this one.
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