Title: choppy sentences
Product review: This book was hard to understand because of the sentence structure. Choppy sentences that went no-where-"worked together, the snow falling, almost wafting, down", and "He had his family walking through the streets, going to school, passing, on their way, Mr. Harvey's green-shingled house". To be fair, I just finished "Empire Falls, by Richard Russo. Mr. Russo writes in a smooth, elegant fashion. I will give a book 50 pages to convince me its worth my time. I stopped at page 43.
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