Title: Interesting concept, horrible execution
Product review: This book was a severe disappointment to me. It's such a shame, because the concept was truly promising. Unfortunately it was totally destroyed by poor writing. Seriously, I wrote better than this in the 6th grade! The language usage is just plain amateur. And don't even get me started on the similes and metaphors ("her red hair shone like rubies in a pirate's treasure chest", that's just classic). I ended up skipping half the book and reading only the last chapters just to see what happened. I couldn't even force myself to read the entire thing. Pure pain.
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