Title: Good concept and story ruined by sloppy writing and editing
Product review: I was really enjoying the story of the Artemis Fowl series, but I found I kept getting pulled out of it by the sloppy writing and editing. Everything from inconsistencies (in the second book there's mention of a purple gel which is described as orange on the next page), incorrect words ("Root was loosing his cool."), and an over-reliance on adjectives (although, to be fair, I suppose that might be excusable as the book's targeted at a younger audience).I can only recommend this book if you can get past this sort of thing. I, personally, can not, and gave up on the series after the second book.
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