Title: Poorly writtten
Product review: The story seemed interesting, and I would have liked to continue with the book. However, I had to give up because of the way it was written. The author continually broke up lines of dialogue in the middle to explain how the character looks in a particular direction, blows a puff of smoke, or some other unnecessary action that should be saved for after the line is spoken. She also has the narrator switch between past and present narrative for no particular reason. The story doesn't flow because of these things and became unreadable because of it. If you can overlook such things, pick it up.
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