Title: Poor guy doesn't know English
Product review: I tried to read this book because I felt sorry for the author, who actually paid to have his book edited. He probably hit upon an editor who once took English 101 and was totally unqualified to do any editing. The result is a disaster. I could not get through the first chapter, although the story seemed powerful.
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