Title: Sorry, but...
Product review: Sorry, I hate to pan anyone's first effort, but I couldn't get beyond the first couple of chapters of this book because of what I felt was poor writing. The premise was certainly interesting, but I found the author's choice of words sloppy and the characterizations wooden. (Now, I can practically hear my dad saying, "If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all.") I think the author shows talent, but she could have benefitted from a more discriminating editor.
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