Title: Predictable story line and POOR writing
Product review: I eagerly awaited my copy of Winter in Kandahar based on the setting of the plot and the wonderful reviews readers left on Amazon. I was disappointed. The setting offered a grand opportunity for an excellent novel but Dr. Wilson was unable to pull much more than a predictable story line with this opportunity. Worse, Dr. Wilson needs to learn sentence combining and to write effective dialogue. Where on earth was his editor? The sentences in this book are choppy and do not flow easily. Often there are too many insignificant details that slow the plot. Potential here? Yes, as long as Dr. Wilson gets some writing instruction.
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