Title: Hmmm
Product review: While the premise of this novel is quite intriguing I would be hard pressed to recommend this book to many. The authors have somehow found it necessary to add overly complex descriptions of times, places or relationships that are not integral to the story. The reader sometimes gets the feeling that they are trying to impress you with their Ivy League education and/or vocabulary. It at times makes for a situation where you are just trying to get through paragraphs to get back to the story. There is also an issue with time...present and past. They mix real time events with story development that occurs in the past...making it difficult to determine the real time line of the book. I think the authors have real potential as storytellers...find a more concise voice
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