Title: Inspiring Story -- The writer did not do it justice
Product review: As a competitive dancer, an avid reader, and a writer, I was compelled to buy this book based on the reviews found here.While the story is an inspiring one, and does gives one some added "fire" to overcome adversity and difficulties, the book was cumbersome. The prose is weak and awkward -- to distraction-- with too much "Tell what happened" and not enough "Show me what happened";Even some of the basics of competitive dance was a bit of a jumble (and incorrect), which hurt credibility.I love to read, and Love to dance. But I had to put this book away after 40 pages. The writing is just too distracting and disjointed.
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