Title: Excellent book, but horrendous editing!
Product review: Wow! I read this book within thirty-six hours. I found it utterly absorbing, and written so well that I found myself right there with the characters. Although nothing will ever be able to outdo Mists, this book isn't trying to. It exists separately, and works well by itself, almost as The Hobbit works with or without The Lord of the Rings. I was extrememly disappointed in the editing of the book, however. As an honours English student, I find it hard to read a book with missing quotation marks and ., all over the place. When I read a history book with bad editing errors, I refuse to finish it- if they've missed simple grammatical mistakes, what else might they have messed up on? It's lucky the content of the book is so good, or I would have put it down. That being said, I'm just about to run out and buy Lady of Avalon, because the first two books in the serious were exquisite!
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