Title: Poorly edited
Product review: This book starts off really good and exciting, but as you read on, you'll realize that it's incredibly boring and pointless. The writer over describes the characters that it becomes unrealistic and cartoonish. The heroine, Djuna, is a miserable little girl. YES, we do know that her childhood is not exactly perfect, but is making her a real bore incredibly necessary? I don't remember a bit in the entire book that she expressed happiness and laughed. Even when she married Jean-Auguste she still acted like a miserable grump. The book needs some editing as well. I don't understand the need of using too much metaphors. Just, GET TO THE POINT! Redundants are visible in this book as well. Didn't anyone edit this book at all?
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