Title: Started out good but...
Product review: The author hooked me with the story line and drew me in, but somewhere along the line the story turned preachy and way to over the top. It's like she tried to draw a lesson from everything instead of focusing on the main story line. When she started quoting long passages of scripture page after page after page, I just lost interest in the story. In the future if you want to hold my interest, give me the story and show me through the character's actions about their chosen path and how God helps them to arrive at their answers. Don't beat me over the head with it. The old adage, show don't tell works here.
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