Title: The writing can be forced, juvenile
Product review: I am about 50 pages into this book, and will not be continuing the read. There have been enough instances in this book so far where the quality of the writing just makes you cringe.....I am copying here a book excerpt that Kirkus Reviews used:`She wept, burying her face against his designer shirt. She had a great ache, in her belly, in her heart. She had lost her father.'' (Then comes a sex scene.)The sex scenes are not why I won't finish the book - it is the writing. It starts to make you wonder if the book was written/published just to deliver the sex scenes.
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