Title: Not sucked in to this "Portal"
Product review: Very amateurish. From the first few pages you got the sense the author doesn't have a grasp on reality or believable characters - his antihero is a nerdy guy but the beautiful, smart and sweet cheerleader is interested in him. Riiight. Then he's a scientist, but "people said he looked more like a rock star than a scientist. But he didn't care what people thought." How delusional! He becomes obsessed with going back to high school and winning the cheerleader, but who cares. There's one kind of good scenario in which he is fired by his boss and makes an impossible threat and then uses the time machine to make it happen. But as the timeline changes problems arise that one can see coming around Fifth Avenue.
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