Title: Thank heavens this was a free book
Product review: I hate to say anything so negative about any faith-based book. However, like a few reviewers already mentioned, this plot was so thin, so obvious, I didn't get past the first chapter. Also - the point of view (POV) switched mid-paragraph and at times, every other sentence which is unusual, and often the sign of an amateur writer.I'm sure the message is lovely, however, this is on a reading level for a young audience (IMHO). I can tell you exactly where the story is going without having finished the first chapter. In addition, I felt the characters to be one dimensional and for me, at least if the characters are strong, I don't care that I can predict the outcome of the story. Sadly, thin plot and thin characters made me delete this one from my Kindle.
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