Title: Unbelievable, as in the story was
Product review: The most unbelievable thing is that I actually managed to make it to the last page. Having shied away from Mr. Ludlum's last few offerings, I eagerly went out to get a copy of his sequel to the Matarese Circle. While I did not fully expect his newest novel to live up to the intensity and power of the earlier work, what I didn't expect was the sloppy writing and unbelievable mistakes being made . A Navy Lieutenant Senior Grade?The USS Ticonderoga is now anaircraft carrier?Naval Officers on a Coast Guard Cutter?Birdsattacking and killing two men? Actually I think what happened here is that a portion of Alfred Hitchcock's script from The Birds was accidentally placed into the story.I find it even more unbelievable that an editor didn't catch these and other glaring mistakes. Perhaps next time Mr. Ludlum might consider having experts in the various fields he is writing about in his novels read his drafts for accuracy.
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