Title: Good story gone astray
Product review: Something went wrong with this story. It starts out with a very cute bachelor auction premise where the heroine wins the hero, but in the next chapter, for no good reason I can think of, it turns out the bachelor she won refuses the honor the win and throws her to his brother. Then there's another chapter with him saying, "I don't know what you're talking about. I wasn't there. No, I'm not him." And her saying "Yes, you're him. You look too much like him not to be him." Then the rest of the book refers to the hero over and over again as having been the bachelor at the auction! Very confusing! A cute story that had a lot of potential, but was very purely executed, and somehow all these errors it got past an editor without being caught.
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