Title: Corny and way too long
Product review: The editing in this book is terrible. So very bad. Shame on Zebra Romantic Suspense for producing a book with so many blatant errors in it.Repetitive phrases are used; 'heart pounding', 'hung the moon'. Silent knowing, understanding and probing looks are also way over used. The main character's pasts and feelings are explained so frequently it's boring and irritating. The same sets are described over and over.Too many explanations points!!!!!Brody Hawke is a horrible example of a Navy SEAL.Nothing about this book works well or is believable.I usually keep the books I've read, but I'll sell this one because there is no chance I'll ever want to read it again.I apologize for the harshness of this review, I usually find something positive to say about an author's work. I just can't do that in this case. I have two more of Ms. Sawyer's books to read and I'm hopeful they will be better.Shelley Dawn, author ofDark NightsandSweet, Sweet Jessie
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