Title: Over Rated
Product review: I found this book poorly written and edited in the first few chapters. Also some factual details are wrong. Many sentences were grammatically incorrect. Garrett wavered between Esther living in a small village in the vicinity of Susa and living in Susa itself. Persia is nowhere near the Arabian Peninsula so it is incorrect to say "under the Arabian sun".When Esther first arrives at the Harem she eats a meal with chicken and tomatoes! Tomatoes are native to the Americas and were unknown to the Persians. If the author got this wrong how can I trust anything else in the book?Mistakes like these pull me right out of a story and I am unable to continue reading it.
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