Title: Not Good...
Product review: Rourke started out a great hero, but this author can never keep a hero 'cool' through an entire book. (Plus, nothing wrong with smoking cigars, but did she have to let Rourke smoke practically one right after the other? And even back then, he should have been considerate enough not to smoke in an elevator full of people.)Becky was a pretty good character but those brothers? There was a 10 year old and a 17 year old and the author had them talking like adults. I wish D.P. would learn how to give teens and pre-teens dialogue true to their ages. Even Rourke's lines were extremely formal, and not 'everyday' speech.
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