Title: Disappointed
Product review: My one-line summary says everything. I had a general feeling that she was going in for shock-value, trying to get her readers to gag. It seemed that that was the single purpose of the book. Her ending to the story was a cop-out. She really should have developed her characters more, they were hollow and did not feel real. The way that Jay and Andrew met was...to be blunt...unbelievable. It was a "hello, I'm a psycho-killer." type meeting. All I can say is that she needed to expand on her characters, cut back on surrounding descriptions, and make the plot more believable. Maybe then I would have gaged. :Sonja
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