Title: advice from the shallow end of the pool.
Product review: This is the sort of book to read quickly as there is much dross. I wasn't that impressed by the examples from well known writers with bits added by Ms Whitcomb , then asked to improve, where we then read the piece in the original. What a cop out- can't she write herself? As for Ms Rittenberg, half the time I felt like I was being battered about the head by a disgruntled teacher, all the while hearing a subtext of "whatever you do,dont call me as your agent." The book left me feeling depressed and when it passes I hope to be able to continue my writing.
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