Title: A novel with potential that peters out in the end.
Product review: Ms. Feldman had the basis for a wonderful story. Unfortunately, she fell short of fully developing it to its potential. The reader is offered tidbits about important characters' lives, with no filling in the gaps in the end. Mack and Bailey's relationship should have been developed more. Bailey became too enmeshed with her "son" too quickly. She also "found" him too quickly and easily. The truth came out too easily as well. Ms. Feldman rushed the story without giving the reader more to chew on first. I hope her next novel is meatier--I will read it.
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