Title: Interesting views, but obscured by prose
Product review: Disturbing as it may be, the author certainly has a point. Life isn't always as beautiful as we may believe it to be, and this awakening is traumatic but necessary. The only problem with this moral is that it's nearly impossible to find.Ms. Ray does an excellent job of imparting the narrator's emotions though voice and mannerism, capturing the angst of a confused fourteen-year-old. The only problem with this is that it's nearly impossible to understand what's being said for lack of readable sentance structure and over-abundant cursing. More than once, I found myself re-reading pages to figure out what had just happened, and by that time, the action had been completely interrupted.In short, the novel was an excellent "snapshot" of a confused teen, but as a story, I found it somewhat lacking.
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