Title: Too elaborate, very annoying to read
Product review: The only thought I had reading this book is why the editor did not do his/her job (if any editor read it at all)? There are too many damn words. Sentences of about half a page long are not uncommon and horrible to read. By the end of the sentence you would have no idea what the beginning was about. Too many discussion of tiny insignificant details that are not important to the story, like elaborate descriptions of rooms. The constant flashbacks are very annoying. I lost track of the story and time frame we were in so many times. All this elaboration really took away the joy of reading because the story would 'stop' at so many times. Is the author trying to show us that he knows the complete english dictionary? If beauty lays in the ability to make things as simple as possible, this book is a monster!
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