Title: Desperately needs an editor
Product review: Mr. McManus book "Alamo in the Ardennes" was a great read and prompted me to find his other works. This book however does not live up to the previous and it really appears that Mr. McManus could have used a better editor for this work. There are several pages with identical sentences written in them and often the prose jumps from one subject to the next and back again in a jerky rough draft sort of way. There is some good data and perspective in this book but it feels like a bad Ambrose quote compilation, not the best of the genre.
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