Title: Learn how to use commas!
Product review: This isn't a full review rather just a comment on the readability of the text. I don't know if this book was unedited or what, but it is very difficult to read. Perhaps there is a thumb tack on Bell Hook's comma key, as she is very reluctant to use it. Example:"Despite the economic gains of individual feminist women, many women who have amassed wealth or the contribution of wealthy males, who are our allies in struggle we have created no schools founded on feminist principles for girls and boys, for men and women."This is just one out of hundreds of hard to comprehend sentences throughout "Feminism is for Everyone." There are also run on sentences, sentences that start with "And" and a large amount of incomplete sentences. Perhaps Bell Hooks thinks that proper English writing rules were made up by men and that she is expressing individuality by flouting them. Whatever the reason, it makes the grammar nazi inside me die a little every time I open the book.
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