Title: I have doubts about Saberhagen writing this himself...
Product review: Maybe he wrote the outline and then gave it to a high school student to finish.The repetition is extremely annoying. At one point (page 171 to be exact) it is mentioned that a character is lucky not to have been injured in a fall. Then it is mentioned twice more in the next few paragraphs.There also seems to be some confusion in the flow of time. Days will appear to have gone by and then it turns out to be the same afternoon. I hate to say it, but it is almost like Mr. Saberhagen would write a few lines, have a couple of cocktails and then write a few more. Doesn't TOR have editors that read these books before they are printed?I have read almost all of Fred Saberhagen's books and am terribly disappointed by this one. I will read the next in the series, but if it isn't any better, then it is time move on.
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