Title: Contrived mess
Product review: It started off with some potential, but rarely have I read a book which contained so many contrived situations. Everyone falls in love with someone, there are juvenile sexual scenes, as well as; a serial killer, a cliche southern red-neck, a typical 'runaway' bus station situation, and the whole family has incredible luck and timing as to run into each other a short time after arriving in LA. This truly reminds me of a story written by a twelve year (minus the sex scenes of course.) It was a waste of time and I understand why it was free.
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