Title: Rough writing
Product review: I wanted to like this book - I love sheikh stories. But this is the second Kate Walker I've tried, and I've found her writing to be jerky. The main problem is speech tags - more are needed to know who's speaking. I can figure it out from the context, but it's too much work! The characters were also not my cup of tea -the heroine was too reactive for me. I like that this writer seems to explore new directions, and I did enjoy the writer's command of sensual language, but this book feels both over-written and under-edited, if that makes sense...?
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