Title: Plot too long and poorly timed
Product review: Contrary to other "low-score" reviewers here, I actually did like the main characters. And the writing style is picturesque and enjoyable. My problem is with the too-long and poorly-timed plot. That and I didn't like the way the author abandoned the first main character soon after the book gets going.I must say, the first several chapters are WONDERFULLY written. I LOVED the Kindle sample, but the whole book? No, I didn't like it at all.
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