Title: Bad Editing Spoiled This Book for Me
Product review: The first chapter of this book was amazing and really had me hooked. I have had to force myself to finish the book (with a pencil in hand to fix typos, grammer and to note incredible inconsistancies in the text). There is no sense of tension built up throughout the story, How many time are we told about Tristen..."if he only knew the truth..?' and then given nothing so that when ever this phrase occurs, I am not encouraged to read on to find out what the "TRUTH" is but just made more frustrated and irritated.I haven't read the second book or the reviews not sure I will.
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