Title: Cliche
Product review: Pettersson is a new writer and it shows. While she has moments of seamless and clever narrative, these moments are sparing. The heroine has all the earmarks of science fiction, from a practically divine birth, to extra special super powers, to model-esq beauty, to rugged toughness. She is just a terrible genre cliché, who struggles to be, but ultimately fails to overcome her meager 2 dimensions.Instead of showing the reader Jo's attributes, she tells us. Over and over again. If a character has protective or philanthropic characteristics, there are better ways of letting us know then having yet other characters just blurt these titles out.I think that Pettersson shows serious promise, but she needs more time to develop her craft.
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