Title: Good Story, Bad Writing
Product review: The premise and "story" of this novel were great, but the writing is so amatuerish it is amazing it got published.Can there be any more 4-letter words in this thing? I'm not a prude, but these words should be used like salt - just enough to season, too much and its unbearable. The characters seem to suffer from Turrets.Also, the writing is full of cliches "the room was spinning", "his/her eyes were moist", "stomach was in knots". And everthing was like in-a-movie. The car "shined like in a movie", "Ah Mr Bond..."The ending had a good twist, but the writing made it hard to give it above 1 Star. If it becomes a movie, I hope they get a good script writer.
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