Title: Unseasoned
Product review: Lynn's book wasn't all that great. The plot was fine, as well as the theme, but it was poorly written and I have reread it several times, and it is still the same. It reflects a great image (that women can do anything), but the image is tarnished by poor writing techniques. Geraldine, the woman in the book, was my grandmother. I am sure Lynn is obviously a great and successful masonary, but writing is not an area of expertise for her. Just the first page alone made it hard to go through a chapter, nevertheless the whole book.
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