Title: Good Story, Badly Written
Product review: An avid reader, it took me nearly a month to finish this story. Boredom set in every time I picked it up. I felt Kay was not a sympathetic character, I found her to be a very weak minded character. This abuse began before her marriage, and there was no one holding a gun to her head to marry him. She had money, family and friends who would have supported her in not marrying him.The actual story takes what seems like years to get to. Too wordy and drawn out. The entire story could have been told in about 50 pages...however this story didn't even become remotely interesting until about page 50.As a Criminal Justice major and advocate for battered women, I've never encountered a woman so non-assertive. If you'd like to rewrite the story, I'd love to help you by making it interesting.
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