Title: Fiction
Product review: If half of this were true, and without the 3rd grade level writing, this might make a good story. Really, this is such a pathetic attempt on the part of Mr. Vandenberg to inflate his own ego and create a myth of himself and why, why didn't he get someone who could write? He sounds like he is desperate and needs years of therapy. Pick up any comic book and you will do better.
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