Title: Please Hire an editor!
Product review: This book could have used a good editor and proof reader! the story is not bad, but the errors and the improper use of the english Language is Jarring! The hook and the plot line have great possibilities but I would prefer better character development. Overall, I might have given this book 3 to 4 stars if it were cleanly edited. I recently read a very good thriller by a new author: "Deviant Ways" by Chris Mooney -- Hanible Lecter Watch out!
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