Title: Low on action, and the story develops too slowly.
Product review: The idea of the story is good, but the execution is lacking. When something interesting comes up I am switched to another character, and not many of them are that interesting. I like the guy who is trying to regain "his" kingdom. Actually I wanted him to die, but that is the hallmark of a good villain. The bastard son is and his pet are interesting also. The rest of the characters could have died, and I would not have cared. The idea of switching character perspective seems like a good idea, but there is no lead off into the next person's PoV unlike a traditional book where one chapter leads into the next one. Reading the book is like talking to someone who just randomly switches topics mid-sentence without any warning.
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