Title: Extremely Poor Storytelling
Product review: I tried to keep going, I really did, but I only made it 8% of the way through this book. I kept reading and hoping that it would get better, but alas it did not.The writing is extremely simplistic. "He did this. Then he felt that. Then he said that." It completely abandons the "show don't tell" rule of all writing. I was completely uninterested in the characters and the plot. I would not suggest this book to anyone.
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