Title: Too Wordy
Product review: The concept was admirable, but the story itself was entirely too wordy. The way the book was organized made it a very difficult read. The paragraphs were too long as with some of the chapters. It was just a bunch of words scrunched together that sometimes had me fading away. I almost fell asleep reading it. I think if it had been written in more of a "story/novel" form and not the Him/Her-He/She format, it would've had a better flow. But the author did keep the language real. I'm looking forward to reading "THE VOW." With the additional authors, this should be a good read but the synopsis already sounds like a remake of Danielle Steel's "SECRETS." A 2.2 on the SmithScale.
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