Title: Poor beginning and no ending
Product review: The beginning and the ending chapters are the most important chapters in a book. This beginning was a rambling about a woman waiting in an airport to fly on a junket to Jamaica. There was no ending. The author should have ended this book instead on leaving it open for a beginning for a future book. I suspect a previous one star review for this book is the only honest review. All the five star reviews must have been from friends of the author.On my last novel, al-Qaeda Strikes Again, based on early reviews, I completely rewrote the beginning so that a body was discovered on the first page. I wrote four endings and had early reviewers comment on which was the best and used that in the published book.
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