Title: A struggle to get through this one.
Product review: This is an excellent story with great potential for characterdevelopment and reader involvement. Unfortunately, it's simplytoo long and encumbered with excessive description and ofteninappropriate metaphors. There is lots of extraneous discussionabout snow and insects which, although possibly interesting initself, did not seem to have anything to do with the story.Although it picked up a bit at the end, I had to struggle mostof the way. And the ending didn't make sense; Winkler didn'teven tell his daughter why he left, which was the main pointof the story!
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