Title: Don't waste your time and money.
Product review: Our local high school has several students who can write better than this! The story was full of inconsistencies and extraneous detail. The references to religion were obviously after-thoughts, perhaps the only way the author could get published by Scherf. The errors in grammar and syntax were so jarring that it became a game to see how many there were on each page. Dialog was childish and boringly repeated in the narrative. (I had the impression that the author was being paid by the word.) An editor would have caught these errors; a good editor would have rejected the manuscript as hopeless.Please benefit from my bad experience. 1.Don't buy anything based on glowing reviews without doing additional research. 2.Have a healthy mistrust of obscure publishing companies. (If a book is so great, an agent will be able to sell it to one of the top houses in the country!)
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