Title: Little Character Development, Slow Plot
Product review: I went into this book expecting to love it... Between the great reviews, and that fact that I've had some success with indie Sci-Fi authors, made me confident. But, it was incredibly disappointing.The author builds the story around some great ideas. But, there's little character development and the writing is incredibly slow. If you aren't going to build the characters, then you really need the story itself to keep people on the edge of their seats - and the pace just moves too slow for that to happen.
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