Title: good writing but bad story
Product review: One star for good writing but this story is not D/s in my opinion but abuse plain and simple. Completely nonconsensual on everyone's part and dysfunctional mind games seemed to be the order of the day.The characters were all extremely annoying. Paul, the Dom, was just obnoxious and I couldn't see what Claire (or anyone else for that matter) would see in him, Claire was completely self-absorbed, Tristin was pitiful and Beth was the worst excuse for a best friend I've ever read about. I didn't care what happened to any of them and only kept reading hoping for some kind of happy ending. The ending kind of drifted off and a "Thelma and Louise" might have served these characters better!If you want to read some great D/s fiction, I would suggest Laura Antoniou's Marketplace series, Claire Thompson's Sarah's Awakening (a romantic bdsm story) or Anastasia Day's Bodice Rippers (three excellent novellas).
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