Title: Disappointing--Needs a proofreader before the next reprint
Product review: I had a very difficult time getting through this book. The grammatical errors and typos really bothered me.The author skips over some very major events in her life, but devotes an inordinate amount of time on minor details. Entire paragraphs are adjective-riddled and hard to keep one's interest. Examples of this are incredibly long, drawn out descriptions of parking her vehicle in a parallel spot, noting directions from a restaurant to a person's house, turn-by-turn, and lots of very boring conversations and observations, etc. Too much minutia, and not enough substance in my opinion.
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