Title: childish
Product review: Newcomb had some good ideas here. Unfortunately, he seems to lack the skill to do anything with them. This is written as if it were intended for 12 year olds. The characters are all caricatures and posture like cartoons. The characters also engage in lengthy and tedious speeches explaining things at the end of every major bit of action and book--because Newcomb cannot figure out how to work facts into narratives and make it a part of the book. There is no skill displayed here at all. It is tedious and silly. The old Fu Manchu character or Doc Savage from the thirties had more layers than this.
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