Title: Amateurish Travel Writing
Product review: This book desperately needs an editor. Not only does the author repeat information several times, his spelling and grammar are atrocious. The author lacks respect for his reading audience which is mirrored by his smug disrespect for many of the people he meets in New Zealand.Perhaps an editor would have deleted his endless descriptions of meals, cigars, reckless driving, and liquor that crowd out more interesting details of his travels. I, for one, don't really care what he ate, smoked, drove, or drank through NZ. What does that have to do with his reader's knowledge of New Zealand?This book is a personal travel journal by an amateurish travel writer. I hope he will learn to be considerate of others and keep his future travel writing to himself.
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