Title: The woman simply cannot write
Product review: If _Mr. Maybe_ is any indication, I cannot believe that Jane Green's work makes to publication. I was constantly finding myself jarred by errors in basic grammar (most noticeably, using "I" when she should have used "me"; e.g.: "he decided to come along with my friend and I"). I can hardly believe this book got past the editors. Then there are the problems with the story itself. For some reason, Nick is supposed to fall madly in love with the main character's personality and spunk, but we never see the spunk, or personality. All we see is a shallow, greedy woman who is determined to find a rich man so she can become a "lady who lunches". What about this woman is Nick falling in love with? It just doesn't make any sense. I was especially disgusted when she kept the Gucci bag that Ed had given her; she should have at least offered to give it back. If she was supposed to have a personality it was well hidden.
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