Title: Has some charm, but in desperate need of grammar help
Product review: I agree with the other reviewer, this seems more like an attempt to translate the first Harry Potter novel into something for younger readers than any original story. But it fails to do even that much. I was left with the impression that the author has a lot of good heart and potential, but that she needs to hone her writing skills in every area from punctuation to grammar to better use of description to an understanding that what she has done is complete plagiarism. She is a writer, but not yet ready to be published.
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