Title: Somewhere under all that fat...
Product review: Somehow it all went wrong with the Naked God...ten sub-plot jostling for page space until the bitter end. The same with this tree killer. Lots of characters and very little action - and when it happens it catches you almost off guard' and in a semi-comatose state of endless pap and hackney'd character development. Somewhere under all that fat lurks a damn fine story. But like his previous soap epic it needs some damn tight editing and slicing off useless subplots and endless descriptions of hang-gliders on mountain tops, industrial parks and silly love scenes.Come on Hamilton...don't write shaggy dog stories. You have immense talent and super ideas...just compress them a bit like you used to do in the early 'leaner days' of the Nano Flower....Oh, and stop trying to write like an American. It's a bit embaressing mate!!
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