Title: Who knew erotica could put you to sleep?
Product review: I rarely put down a book unfinished, but I only got through a third of this one.1. Pretty 20-year-olds are boring. There's a reason why the character Avalon (gossip columnist for the newspaper) stole every scene she was in; she was experienced enough to have some depth, which made the sex charge that much hotter.2. While I don't demand too much of a plot from erotic novels, having some storyline makes me anticipate reading on, not just a disconnected series of sex scenes.3. This one is purely personal: I live in LA. I love LA. This, Madam, is not LA -- it's the Los Angeles of cliche and clique. Yes, again, this is a fantasy, but if I'm constantly arguing with the book, I kind of lose track of who is doing what to whom with what in whose bed.
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