Title: Difficult to follow the story
Product review: The sequence of events in this book are written in such a round-about way, it is often difficult for me to keep them straight. It starts out fairly straightforward - Don goes to a conference, then is involved in a horrible car crash. He dies and goes to heaven and experiences many beautiful and wonderful things. Then the sequence starts to get fuzzy. And maybe that's because it's how the author remembers his experience. His recovery is a mish-mosh of various experiences, feelings, thoughts, people, memories, all jumbled together. A few select scenes stand out, but there's no progressive thread taking you from A to B to C. The author tried to sort most of the story into themed chapters, but many experiences are described over and over, and it's hard to find the stated theme of the chapter in what you're actually reading. It's a great story, one everyone should hear, but the book needs a lot more structure.
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