Title: Interesting Concept, good attempt by novice.
Product review: I read lots of thrillers and this is a good first novel to a point. The plot is a bit far-fetched, like a romantic fantasy from a serial from the 1930's. Coincidences are stacked upon coincidences until deus ex machina applies throughout far more scenes than the final.Editing suffers and I agree with a previous review about the stilted conversation that is totally out of character from the characters using that dialogue. It's just not believable dialogue.The book is published by Hailey-Grey Books, and a Google search for them turns up only winterinkandahar.com...apparently the novel is self-published, which while not necessarily a bad thing, explains much of the draft style dialogue.Overall, its an okay book for reading if you're killing time waiting for your flight.I'm hoping Steve Wilson improves with effort.
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