Title: Mr Right is too choppy, too predictable, too outrageous
Product review: SPOILERSI agree with other posters who have commented the kindle version is poorly formatted.I found myself often getting confused with the author's style. Anna would be in conversation with a potential date, and then the next paragraph she would be retelling the story to a confidante.Predictable - was there anyone who didn't know she wasn't going to end up with the most desireable man of all - Mark? And hang on to her upswinging career despite not really indicating any crises or decisions she had made that would justify her getting being promoted to her own store in LONDON. That was predictable and contrived at the same time!And outgrageous - that Darren was Adrian? Not even in the same city! Give me a break. Adrian was often photographed with Victoria...to have a secret life and meet his wife's nemesis at the same time?Like many of her countrywomen, the author does have talent. I will read more of her work.
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