Title: Not a bad start
Product review: This helping from the author is a bit all over the place. Our author needs a crash course on some literary devices, such as chapters. This looks like a self-published effort and in that regard it's not too bad but it cries out for a good editor. The continuity in the action scenes needs a lot to be desired.
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