Title: Erotica Needs to be Erotic
Product review: When I read the title I thought "Sign me up." The first chapter was OK but not that hot. The thing that killed it for me was the warning at the end stating that this was a warning to people who think it is OK to act out a fantasy involving extra-marital sex. I'm sorry, if I want to read a story with a moral I will head for the children's section. This left a bad taste in my mouth for the rest of the stories when it became obvious that they were a couple pretending their fantasies.I like to write erotica myself and I have read some extremely hot amateur stories. They left these for dead. If I want to get worked up it needs to be hot, hot, hot and not have the image of a nanny in the background warning you to keep yourself under control and not let things get out of hand.
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