Title: Not Much Going On
Product review: I was first introduced to Monica O'Rourke when she co-wrote a book with author Wrath James White, so I decided to see what she could do on her own. Unfortunately, I wasn't impressed. Yeah, it has a few grossout moments and some graphic violence, but it's written with such little buildup and suspense, it loses it's intended effect. For such a short novel, I was also surprised at the number of typos the book has. It has a few decent bits here and there -- I enjoyed the diaper scene for some twisted reason -- but I can't recommend this mainly because of the lack of story. Wait, that's not fair, there is a story -- a crazy man has decided that sex and torture are a fast way for overweight women to lose weight so he puts it upon himself to help them shed some pounds. Huh? Yeah. That's the story.
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