Title: Great story, poor writing
Product review: I'm right there with William. It was a great story, kept moving, wasn't too formula, took some unexpected turns, but.......The grammar was atrocious. There was some kind of problem on every page. William outlined some, I found those and some really offensive ones like,...for all intensive purposes. It's for all intents and purposes, or...they detonate on. Which should have been one, not on....speak you mind. Do I need to explain this one?...as a big rig blew by during 70 miles per hour. What? Maybe "doing"?The problem was all these errors were in 2 Kindle pages! I can understand one or two typo's in an entire book, but this was worse than a high school paper. I'm sure it would have been an "F".I like to speed read, and I had to keep stopping to check out the mistakes and figure out what was intended. Liked the plot, but someone needs an editor.
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