Title: Great Visuals - Terrible Written Word
Product review: I love the visuals of this book, which is why it is so frustrating that there is no narrative frame, the words don't flow off the tongue (e.g., "Red caboose at the back Orange tank car next Yellow hopper car"). Grammatically a train wreck, heh heh: periods are inconsistently used, capitalization is all over the map too. Not a good example for baby, in my view. Does HaarperCollins have any copy editors?
Would you say this review depicts the product in a flattering or unflattering light?
