Title: This Writing in This Book Was Horrible!
Product review: The story was fine, but the writing simply ruined the book for me. Does the writer think we are idoits who have to be reminded several times IN ONE PAGE that it was Jane Doe who did this, Jane Doe who did that, and then Jane Doe said this? What other Jane WAS there?! He repeatedly used the last names of characters to the point where I wondered if HE couldn't remember which Jane was involved just two paragrahs ago. Was the book written by different people? at different times? and then put together without an editor? My mother simply looked at it and said "Bad writing is bad writing." She couldn't get past a few chapters. We have read a lot of books, but this one was simply the worst written I have seen in a long time. If there was a rating less than one star, this book certainly deserves it.
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