Title: I was disappointed
Product review: I found it difficult to even finish this work. I think Ms. McCormack has potential but her writing resembles that done for college level creative writing courses. Overly descriptive with a sophomoric 'breathy' quality. Characterizations tended to thin out. I'll wait and borrow her next one from a friend rather than purchase it myself. I had high hopes after reading Ms. Jarmen's work.
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