Title: Fun but unsatisfying and not worth the price
Product review: I bought this book based on reviews and the sample Amazon provided of the first chapter. While it was a fun read, the book lacks much in basic story telling. The author does a masterful job of describing the stagecoach and the storm, but then seems amateurish in her handlng of the plot and detailing of her characters. The plot is simplistic and without surprise, the characters are one-dimensional. Not only does our author too often tell us what they said rather than allowing them to say it, their inner thoughts and reactions change direction so quickly and so often that it became hard to take any of them seriously. In the end, I was convinced that the book had been written a century ago by a housebound lady dreaming of adventure but with little knowledge of how to tell a story. As I said, it was a fun read but for this reader, definitely not worth the Kindle price Amazon is charging.
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