Title: This author is trying too hard.
Product review: I've now read 2 books by this author, & I think she creates overly elaborate romances based upon really unrealistic plot devices. I think she could write a good Harlequin if she'd only simplify her plots & make her characters less flat. They don't have any distinguishing characteristics; it's just about unbelievable sexual attraction. You can have that in a Harlequin but Geez, give the characters something else too. Otherwise it's a waste of time. This book: it's dull and slow. I don't think I'll try anything else by this author.
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