Title: not that great
Product review: I got the first one and the concept is cool... I am a writer, however, and the book (well both of them) makes me cringe. The tenses are weird and the points of view are also a bit wonky. its also written really awkwardly. It's all the same for the second one, I'm not sure why I expected it to be better. The concept is ok, but the writing is bad. Just plain bad.
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