Title: Nobody should have to read dialog this stupid
Product review: The very first scene between Pru and Tristan contains some very forced, contrived, dialog. Then a few chapters later, their sex scene even contains forced, contrived, and ill-timed dialog.This story has a great premise. There is tempting sub-plot potential with his twin brother, but it falls flat. Maybe it is too much of a stretch that Tristan's country neighbor, with the sheep in her front yard, is also the high-born lady that he feels he's not cultured enough for.But for me the show-stopper was the absolute lack of nuance in this story. You can see immediately where it is going from the opening scene, and that makes it not worth reading.
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