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Title: Great Imagination -- Terrible Writing
Review: Although I was impressed by the author's imagination, I found the book to be almost unreadable due to problems with the writing -- things that any decent editor should have caught and corrected before the book went to press. Examples are careless changes in point of view in mid paragraph, characters knowing things that they can't possible see/hear/sense, and excessively ornate descriptive language. Another set of distractions include, for example, two characters on the tracks in front of an onrushing train having thirty seconds or so of conversation and action without being hit by the train just described as being 40 feet away. At 60 miles per hour, it takes a train about 1/2 second to close a 40 foot gap.This is an author in search of an editor or a writing course. I hope he finds one or both and I look forward to reading his writing afterward.
