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Title: It had a good start but then...
Review: "Black Light" gets off to a good start. I like the way the author brings the dotcom world into the story. The character development is pretty good too.Once the two main characters head to Massachusetts though, things start to fall apart. The characters didn't really seem to develop for the rest of the story. A lot of what they did and said seemed very one-dimensional.I was especially disappointed with the ending. It seemed very derivative of other books I've read and movies I'd seen, and was very predictable. Plus, the time travel element seemed like kind of a cop out, as if the author had gotten to that point and then didn't know what to do next. An example of how a time travel element was better used is at the end of Dean Koontz's book "Lightning."This author has potential, but needs to flesh things out better in their next novel.
