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Title: Needs an editor
Review: Have just finished reading this book. Dosen't anyone use an editor these days?? She spends a hundred pages telling us about overcoming her resistance to writing the book!! More detail, less speculation and family conversations would have made for a less labourious read. Does not really add a lot to information about Atlantis. A lot of extraneous material to wade through before finding a few gems.The Cayce material is more worthwhile. I hope she finally managed to lose weight though and Archangels Michael and Gabriel kept their part of the bargain.
