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Title: Slow start, awkward middle ....
Review: I read the first 14 chapters of this book with interest. The mystery plot was slow to develop, but the character was interesting enough to keep me involved.Then, suddenly, in Chapter 15, the point-of-view inexplicably changed from the main character to a very awkward omniscient point of view where we followed "the murderer" who, through an unbelievable set of convenient circumstances, stalked and killed another victim. At that point, I wanted to throw the book against the wall.My final analysis -- clumsily plotted, and enough manipulative and awkward segments to totally destroy any interest I had in the book. I skipped forward to see if I had been right when I predicted the killer, and found out I was.That isn't a good sign, either. I'm usually wrong.Obviously, your mileage may vary.
