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Title: One doesn't return a gift...
Review: This book was a gift from a friend who thought I'd like it. And I appreciated the thought. In a way, I did like it. There were heart-wrenching moments and a nifty ending, but I just can't stand wading through the endlessness of the never-ending present-tense. Even in real life one does not live in the present tense. To me, this literary device, posing as great literature, is becoming all too common among gay writers. I'll be glad when writing an entire story in present tense is old hat and goes away.
