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Title: I'm sorry I didn't listen to the negative reviews
Review: My initial thought is that the characters conversation seems stiff or mechanical. Even their thoughts seem to lack a certain flow. It's just WEIRD.An example was the first chapter; the author didn't allow you the opportunity to get to know the characters. (Granted I know it's a romance novel however if you can descriptive details about the home, the kid, the brothers etc, then you should be able to cut back on those descriptive details and give me more character development so that I can relate.) I was thoroughly confused with who's who and what's what. It was like a continuation of the first book however if you didn't read the prior book, you're going to be lost. In fairness, maybe my Kindle edition was missing a few paragraphs/sentences and that's why I didn't get a proper introduction to the characters. Yeah (Insert my sarcasm).Nonetheless, I like the premise of the book I just didn't like the execution.
