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Title: Jumbled story line
Review: The author jumbles the story line to try to make the book more interesting. This is a writing style that can work well when plots have interesting plot twists. Actually it is a style that promises a plot twist, but not for this book as it had no plot twists. The book starts into the timeline and jumps back as the character recalls how he got there. I have perhaps read all of the authors books so I have liked the material in the past but it seems like each book becomes less interesting and more jumbled. In this book it is because the characters havent done a single thing that they havent done in past books. With the exception of the main character joining the army. However, the reason for the character joining the army wasnt believable. While people have certainly joined armies in real life for less, it really felt like it was against his character type.
