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Title: Help, I can't find Earth!
Review: Regarding "The Weapon": This guy is so promising; he has most of the nuts and bolts of writing down pat -- believable character, realistic action -- but he doesn't know when enough is enough. The premise of alien moles (who are near-genius, super-trained warriors) activating when earth abuses their homeworld, that's what I'd love to read.But all the minutiae you have to wade through to get to the point where he goes to earth! I'm at page 138 and am tired of all this beautifully-described training. Worse, when I try to scan ahead for when he gets to earth, I can't find it because everything's so densely packed. If there'd just been a table of contents with three things -- prolegomena (or some catchy word for the endless buildup), mole insertion on earth, attack by earth with retaliation. But no.Somebody, please post the page number where he gets to earth. Thanks.
