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Title: Clunky
Review: Unusually for me, I was suckered in by the author blurbs on the front.This book is very difficult to read. All the thoughts are fragmented...dialogue, internal character thoughts, action, everything. It jumps around, never giving enough information to figure out what's really going on in a particular scene.If the prose was better, this book would be ok. The ideas aren't all that bad, it's just a friggin' slog to extract them from the weird prose. Too much work. Also, it is often unclear which character is speaking, which I suppose is another problem with the prose. And then there's the POV...it keeps jumping from character to character.I actually haven't finished the book...I'm on page 146...but I don't think I will, because I'm really struggling. And I have utterly no clue where the rave reviews on the cover came from. It's a very clunky and obscure book. Which is a pity, because if the author cleaned up their prose, it might have been a good book.
