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Title: too narrative and paint by the numbers
Review: Two things are obvious: Diana Diamond, pseudonym, is a man and his main goal is getting his advance rather than making a magical entertaining novel.. I read The Babysitter and enjoyed..it then I read..the Good Sister...and it was so amateurisly done, I stopped reading the novel after 100 pages...then after the big hype..here I am..reading "the First Wife" and find...he's making the same sophomoric mistakes...we get the heroine's thoughts in a rambling narrative..but see very few dramatic scenes...all writer's courses..shout..show don't tell..obviously...he missed that...It's much harder to pen "good dramatic" scenes....easy to use narrative.....why is he squandering his wonderful mind..(I detect a first rate mind here)?????I'll let you know...my final verdict...should I continue..though I might..just shelve it, considering I have better things to do with my time..
