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Title: Story line was okay, editing was atrocious!
Review: The story was okay. It had some unexpected twists which make it interesting. There was character development that was irrelevant, but other vital characters were not developed at all. The editing of this book was absolutely horrible. Numerous misspelled words, improper punctuation, and subject verb "disagreement". I mention this because it made me re-read many lines just so I could understand the point that was being made. At times, it was difficult to understand who was speaking. For Mr. Carter's next effort (if there is one), he needs to hire PROFESSIONAL editors, not friends and family that "write good".
