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Title: Very childish writing
Review: Why did this man NOT have an editor? I kept wanting to re-write it. It should have been an interesting tale, but the style in which it was written makes me think he just copied it from his journal. The conversational "quotes" were particularly unnecessary.The tedious telling just petered out in the end......I suggest that he actually study the genre, then lock himself away for a re-do.
