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Title: This author got paid by the word!!
Review: I'm sure of it. It's interesting for about 50 pages, than gets repetitive and repetitive and repetitive. This author needs a good, honest friend, and a much better editor. How is it possible that he couldn't access any photographs? Not even the front of the building? Scandalous. This is a story that is ripe for telling, it just needs a more disciplined writer. Otherwise if you employ the Evelyn Wood speed reading technique, you might actually get through the whole book.
