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Title: This tale lacks cohesion.
Review: I must concur with many of the reviewers who found fault with TRoN; Chang's book not only lacks proper pacing and flow, it's greatest fault lies in the educated reader's feeling that some of the facts are not sufficiently substantiated. As a high school teacher I have read essays from students who have structured their points of view more coherently than she has. Most often, the events are presented in a jumbled and haphazzard manner, as if Chang is piecing together a collection of war horror stories rather than weaving the facts into a story. It was obvious from the start that the selling point of her novel was the sensationalistic and provoking title and subject matter, not necessarily the way in which the material was presented. Better, less impassioned writers will do a superior job with the material in the future.
