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Title: Awkwardly written to the point of outrage by the reader.
Review: Unrelenting exploration of institutional pain and those trained to deliver it. The Author needs an editor who can delete enough words in the sentences to make them flow. An example--the character takes a "wet shower"--really is there a dry one? The main character is so noble you want to throw up. Its a hard read because the author can't just state something. Sometimes I had to read a sentence three times to get its meaning. She needs to study Hemingway. A boring book and hard to read. Can I get my money back?
