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Title: The editor slipped up
Review: The basic story line is quite interesting. The characters have depth and complex relationships. The plot is a little predictable, but it is interesting.The pace of the story is excruciatingly slow, with a great deal of unneccssary detail and repitition of the same stuff every 4-5 pages.A good editor is supposed to help identify these types of wrinkles and smooth them out. The author is on the right track, but this edition is 100 pages too long for the story it tells.There's nothing wrong with having the extra 100 pages, it's just a good idea to write them in a manner that keeps the reader driving to the next page instead of dragging into it,
