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Title: It Needs a Rewrite
Review: Near the beginning of the book there is a whole page describing how an object moved - up; down; to the right; then to the left; then up; then down etc. This was done again later on taking up a good portion of the page, and repeating this scenario lesser in other pages.I do not understand how a person can have an alien implant on the roof of his mouth without him feeling it with his tongue, as a dentist removed it.I found 5 typos, and a couple of words that did not pertain to anything.And the reader does not know when the author is talking being that there is not a new paragraph when he does.In general the book was not well written.As an overall I think the book needs a rewrite.
