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Title: Buy used if you must
Review: I'm from Boulder originally and thought it would be great to read a local author about a local area.The book is amateurish and derivative. Acevedo writes like a beginner. There is no character development and the whole plot becomes increasingly a mcguffin. (Screenwriting term for a quest or object that doesn't really matter, it's just the starting point for a romp.)I thought all of the modern vampire lore was a bore. Done better in many other places. The hypnotising eyes are used too often. Plot-wise, it's convoluted and unstimulating.The Iraq war scenes at the top were the most interesting. Somebody must have told Acevedo war stories would be a bore so spice it up. Put vampires in it, yeah! And write a sexy title, wooh!I won't buy his next book, but I'm inspired to publish a novel now. Look at the competition.
