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Title: Author apparently paid by the word
Review: I appreciate what the author is trying to convey, that a healthy diet is important for a healthy child. Unfortunately she requires about 600 pages to do it, when probably 150 would have sufficed. After slogging through it, my opinion is that it should have been written more like a reference book, with clear sections and concise information. Instead it is very disorganized and littered with phrases like, "Please re-read the passage about Water on page 98." "Refer to page 142 for information on soybeans."What a pain. I'm sure there's a better book out there (and I'll let you know when I find it).
