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Title: One star for the idea... zero stars for the style.
Review: I was hoping this would be an entertaining read... but this was one book I just couldn't finish. I was greatly disappointed in the writing style... for example:"Nick pushes the Glock into the waistband of his trousers, kneels by the body and probes the mess of one of the ragged chest wounds, feels something hard slide around and digs it out and shows it to Harmony."I find the present tense style to be very annoying... and was so distracted with the use of the tense that I could not begin to enjoy the book. I quit about one-third of the way through... and only got THAT far because I was forcing myself, since I didn't want to admit that I had wasted $7.99 on the book. If you don't mind the use of present tense, go ahead and try "White Devils"... since the story isn't so bad. But I just couldn't stand it.
