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Title: When successful writers become greedy
Review: The one plot development that might have saved this mess is if Ryan senior had got wind of what "The Campus" and Hanley were doing and outed the whole operation as undemocratic and unsupported by him, proving the pardons to be forgeries. As it is, Clancy shows he has no respect for his readers by allowing this woeful, unlikely storyline to go to print. Due to the lack of editing I feel it has been written and published hastily to fulfil a contractual obligation. Clancy deserves the poor reviews he has received, not only for the poor character development (typical of Clancy) and plodding writing (which some editing would have sharpened), but in one scene he has been so careless as to change a character's name (Wills/Woods). Does Clancy really believe his readers to be so gullible and still buy more. I don't think so...
