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Title: Incoherent mess
Review: I made it to page 52 before I gave up. Rambling babble with no structure. It is just Herr attempting to impress himself page after page. Very pretentious. I mean, here's an example from page 44: "If milk snakes could kill you, you might compare the Mission and its arms to a big intertwined ball of baby milk snakes. Mostly they were there that innocent, and about that conscious. And a lot, one way or the other, had some satisfaction."WHAT?? Huh?? What did I just read?? Did that make ANY sense?? Amateurish prose masquerading as intellectualism. I mean, half the passages in this book could be submitted to that yearly contest they do where people send in the worst possible opening sentences of imaginary novels.I read all the good reviews and was excited to read this book. But man, it's horrible. One of the most poorly written books I have ever attempted to read. Big thumbs down.
