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Title: Almost Perfect For an Inexperienced Teen Reader
Review: My 16 year old found out about "Maintenance Man" and asked me to get it for her. In her opinion it was a good book, so I decided to read it. I'm an avid reader and I love a good story. The first thing I thought was that at this point Mr. Baisden is not a Pulitzer award-winning author, but the plot of his story was interesting. There were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors in his book that should have never passed his editor and proofreaders. Character development could have been improved. Mr. Baisden doesn't even begin to skim the surface of the world of a male esort (aka gigolo) and he had room to go a lot deeper with his lead character. Mr. Baisden's depiction of women was rather harsh and unsympathetic in my opinion. I think Mr. Baisden should take some constructive criticism, reflect on his motive for wanting to write and who his target audience might be, what they want, and then improve his style and skill.
