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Title: crappy plotting
Review: There's a lot to enjoy in this book. Unfortunately there's also things that made me nuts. I hated Gracie's family. Her mother and her sisters were all about "me, me, me" through the first half of the book. I wanted Gracie to tell them all to go to hell. Then about half way through the mother has an unexplained, completely unmotivated and unconvincing Epiphany and suddenly everything is wonderful again. I so didn't buy it. Then at the climax of the book, *spoiler alert* Riley's ex-wife just happens to leave her front door ajar so Gracie can conveniently get the goods on her without breaking any laws. Yeah. That's a cheap cop-out caused by poor plotting. And all this from a widely published romance author. And people wonder why romance gets no respect. It's not a mystery to me.
