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Title: awash in adverbs
Review: I want to read this book, I even want to like it. After two chapters I am so drowning in a multitude of adverbs and awkward phrasing ("a young man who recently asserted quarter seriously that he...", p. 8) that I don't know if I can or will finish it.Still trying, giving 2 stars for ambition, taking away 3 for the obvious lack of a good editor. Hope to scan the whole thing if I can. Dropping the adverbs alone might cut the book length by a hundred pages... and sell more copies.
