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Title: Please get a better editor!
Review: As others have mentioned, the book was really poorly written. I actually have a hard-copy of the book (free, thankfully!) and I finally got out my red pen because I couldn't stand it any more. There was incorrect word usage and poor grammar. They even used the wrong name for a character at one point!(they must have changed it at some point at missed some corrections) Most of that I blame on whoever the editor was supposed to be. Even moving past all of that, I found the plot tremenously predictable and trite, with excessive meanlingless details. Since this was a Harlequin, some of me also expected a little more on the "romance" side of things, even though it is supposed to be an "intrigue" novel. Yeah, none of that either. Can't believe someone got paid to write this...
