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Title: Come on! Wrap it up!
Review: Okay...The Rising...had some potential. I really did want it to work. But here are the problems. First off, you are introduced to way too many military characters to keep track of. And the names, Miller, Kramer..all so ordinary, you can't remember who is evil or who might be OK. Then, we're supposed to understand why an Asian child turned zombie can't understand English (since his living self didn't understand it) but an unborn fetus can suddenly wax poetic? And finally, when they story seems to have really taken off, and the situation becomes dire, and you can't wait to turn the page to see how it comes together, the author simply stops writing.Now, I'm all for allowing the reader to use his/her imagination, but come on! Plot, plot and more plot, and then we're left to sum it all up. Won't be reading this author again.
