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Title: Sex scenes are unrealistic
Review: I liked this book but I just have to "vent" a little about how the author writes about sex. Even though the sex scenes are pretty good and realistic to a point, Weill refers to the main character's "sex" as in she "touched his sex." Now everyone reading this book knows that the term "sex" is never used by a real man to describe his genitals. Even children now are taught the proper term. I am old enough to know that a grown man has never thought of his body in this way. Later in the book Weill uses an explicit word for the male genitals as part of a character's dialogue. Why then would he use the silly term "his sex" in the book? Surely a man born in 1933 knows better than this.
