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Title: Did anybody check this book for accuracy?
Review: Details!!When the children are first introduced, they are 9, 7, and 5. Yet when Granville discusses them with Lucy, suddenly they are 8, 6, and 5. Huh? Impossible. Also, Ms. Kennedy gets her days mixed up. At one point early on Granville's sister asks him why he hadn't attended the event "last night," yet if one had paid attention, one would notice that it was actually TWO nights before, as he had to go find Lucy, and be rebuffed, the day in between. These terrible "slips," if not caught by the author herself, ought to definitely not slip past an editor.
