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Title: Interesting Idea for a plot-needs lots of editing
Review: I started reading this book with great hopes because everyone in my family has been military. The book cost one arm and a leg, but it has a decent cover so I was hopeing for good things. First thing that was a problem was that there is a big space between every paragraph. I suppose with out that, the story would be about 110 pages long. So they are making the book long and charging the big cost when they really should not. Next thing is that the story gets more confusing as you go along with lots of telling and not good showing, and then, to make matters worse, there is an average of 4 typos on every single page. I'm thinking this author needed an editor and just copied up the first draft and printed it. It is from Desktop Publishing, though, so maybe the woudl explain it.Sorry to say, this book isn't really good enough ... It has promise but isn't there yet.
