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Title: learn how to write before you write a book
Review: For the first several chapters I was shocked at the poor writing style. Every paragraph was filled with sentences that were not varied and showed a juvenile way of writing as if she were a high school student. Even her opinions sounded very immature; "she seemed stuck up" was one of those descriptions. There were sentences that ended in a period that weren't complete sentences and should have been a continuation of the previous sentence. Amazing! Once she got going into the heart of the story, it got a little better but the author still doesn't seem to know when a chapter should end and a new one begin. I can't imagine that she can be writing another book. Take some college level courses and learn how to write on the level of someone who gets published.
