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Title: nto very pleasing
Review: After reading Eddie's world I can honestly say it leaves alot to be desired. Charles Stella needn't quit his day job.The characters are remote and lack true motive. Although the dialogue cooks at times, Stella's needs work on refining his prose. He goes in and out of tenses causing the reader to stand on a mountain and ask "Where the hell am I"? The novel starts off well until I got to chapter one. It lacks direction and moreso lacks passion and falls flat by the prologue which explains why I never got that far.
