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Title: Book has good plot, but lacks good character development
Review: The concept for the book is good, but the characters are not at all realistic. They have very simple emotions and do not use the type of language 90's teenagers use. Lacey in particular is unbelievable. She is this extremely angry girl with a rotten home life, yet she still talks like a 19th-century grandmother (as do all her characters). I realize McDaniel may personally be offended by strong language, but if you are going to write good literature you need to be able to create a character separate from yourself. McDaniel does not seem to be able to do this often enough to consistently create believable characters.
