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Title: Too much writing, not enough said
Review: Hardin's writing is engorged with creative descriptionsof unattractive things. I like really excellent descriptionsof unattractive things. Full and creative descriptive writingused to good effect can make for engrossing and vivid stories.Unfortunately, all Hardin gives us in Distorture are fulland creative descriptions tossed at the reader like changbeing thrown to a street creature. You see what I mean?If he can learn to string these evocative phrases into acohesive picture, he will be a force to be reckoned with.His choices of subject for his vignettes are intriguing andhis take on the subjects interesting.I will be keeping an eye out for his future work, butDistorture was not worth the time I spent reading it.
