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Title: Editing is atrocious
Review: I am on page 381 of this tomb. Every other page has been a journey through the seventh circle of grammatical hell. Someone at Penguin really dropped the ball on this one. However, I am determined to muscle my way through. If you can ignore the editing problems, fill in the holes, and keep the concept at the forefront of your mind, you may find some redeeming qualities in the tale. In fact, if you just keep a pencil handy and edit for yourself, you may very well uncover the diamond in this (apparantly) rough draft.The most positive bit I can say for this so far is that there is definte atmosphere. Schilling doesn't quite capture this as, say, Iris Murdoch, but you understand what Schilling is attempting to accomplish, and if you permit yourself to let go of your technical snobbery, you will be drawn into the attempt.
