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Title: Good story, but the editing drove me crazy!
Review: I really enjoyed this story and I plan to look for more by Shane Johnson. But the editing (or lack of) drove me crazy! Many times apostrophes were neglected leaving "were" instead of "we're" and "shell" instead of "she'll". The editor regularly used a style of grammar that was awkward, allowing this arrangement of words:"...Terrorist actions ALL HAD wrought their effects" instead of "...terrorist actions HAD ALL wrought their effects". Every time I encountered this (nearly every page) I had to turn it around in my head. I wanted to get out my red pen and do some mark up!!!! And a shame, too. Because the story held together pretty well, otherwise.
