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Title: Pity the writing is so poor.
Review: I'm just finishing reading The Prince of Dreams, the second in the Seven Brothers trilogy. I bought books one and two not knowing how good of a writer Benjamin was, and unfortunately I have been very disappointed on that score.The author has obviously researched ancient Chinese history extensively and has crafted an interesting, vivid story. The problem is his writing abilities do not live up to the story he is telling. Often I am reading and find myself asking "WHO is he talking about?" "That statement makes NO sense", "WHY is he telling something that he's already told us twice before?" etc. His writing is stilted, forced and confusing in many places in the book.A pity. With more honed writing skills, this book could have been a huge winner. As it stands now, unfortunately I doubt I'll buy the third in the series.
