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Title: knees' of bees
Review: Although I enjoyed the fanciful prose and metaphors, I felt like the author was holding back on many of the issues of abandoment,abuse,and racism that were introduced into the story early on and certainly could have been explored within the prose. I say "cut loose, Sue", write the story you are wanting to tell and you will elevate above the knees', perhaps even allowing more heart.
