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Title: This one was a real headache....
Review: While this book has some promising aspects it becomes a tedious grind of events as seen and felt by the very self absorbed heroine Tyler St Claire. Using her gift of second sight causes her headaches "Pain like a lance of forge hot steel pierced my forehead over my left eye". The book is littered withwhat are best described as pain and angst paragraphs. Her extreme reaction page to touching Adam Wiccam "Pain exploded in my head, a ricochet of agony - on and on ending with "the pain was a caustic, cutting agony boring through my brain" What will she do when she receives her bothers finger in the box - you may well ask. She is supported in her endeavors by characters far more interesting. I would rewrite this and add more of her brothers perspective and edit out 90% of Tyler's self dialogues.
