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Title: If ever there were a writer who needs writing classes ...
Review: I hate to say negative things about any writer. I know how much work goes into it, and applaud anyone who takes the time to think a story all the way through, and put those thoughts on paper. But this is an expensive paperback, and in desparate need of editing!The writing is very poor. The general concept of the book is cute, even interesting, and pretty creative. But the writing is so bad, that its hard to force yourself to continuing reading at times.I think what bothered me most about this book is that the publisher allowed it to be printed, without editing first. And trust me, it's obvious this wasn't edited!I hope Mr. Stark continues to write. I think he has a great imagination, and is capable of producing some good fiction. But I hope in the future, he takes the time to polish his work before sending it off to be published!
