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Title: Please make it better next time
Review: Is it a book or a computer game? The characters act like the robots they are inside their battle-suits; the alien Posleen get slaughtered en masse, preferably by dropping mega-skycrapers on them ... Oh yes, there are interesting parts as well - the "allies" play a very deep game, but one really has to stretch the imagination to see a plot here. In sum: stupid!For a first novel this may not be so bad, however in that case the blame for its lack of plot and other weaknesses is with the editor. But maybe it was a first for them too ... . Please make it better next time.
