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Title: A 200+ paged advertisement
Review: I thought I had encountered bad writing, but boy was I in for a shock when I opened this one. For the life of me I do not see what all the applause was about. I read somewhere that in order to succesfully write in first person you either have to be a genius or a mad-man, Grosvenor has proved she is neither one. The writing level was meant for someone in the fifth grade, who had no intentions upon going to the sixth grade. What was all the bolding about throughout the book. I don't need anyone to highlight Maxwell or Pepsi or Versace for me, to know that they are either celebrities or name brands. Not only was the writing juvenile but the description of the dialogue, i.e. he said. . . then I said. . .? What was that? And for it to be a Christian novel but for the writer to only start quoting scripture three quarters through the book. I don't understand the accolades she has gotten on this book, because she has clearly missed the mark.
