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Title: Cutting Edge #1
Review: The story had potential, much as the characters. But neither ever came to fruition. It was obvious that the writer couldn't even get inside the heads of his characters, so how he expected a reader to do so is beyond me. A good editor might be able to pull this from the scrap heap, because there are some good story elements worth salvaging. The grammer, spelling, and punctuation errors might have been caused by the conversion process, so I did my best to ignore them and am only mentioning them so future readers can be prepared. I will probably read the second in the series if only because I truly want to see this writer improve on the craft.
