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Title: Couldn't Find the Books Mood
Review: Having enjoyed "Intimate Enemies" by Shana Abe, I looked forward to reading "The Smoke Thief". I thought this book suffered from a lack of focus - it just seemed all over the place. After the first 100 pages I still couldn't figure out exactly who was what, what was what, and where they were. That's not to say there weren't some good sections, but I actually had to read the other reviews to get a deeper sense of the story. So, given that, I'd say all in all, the main characters of Kit and Clarissa could have used more depth, the background of the Drakon should have been edited down and simplified, and the story more streamlined. Would have made a better book, and the mood of the book may have come alive, which for me, it didn't.
