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Title: Mixed-Up Metaphors
Review: Only in the third chapter, I'm struggling to read it through the annoying metaphors that seem to be there without purpose. For example, in surveying the room Lena burnt, Ella notices the curtains that remind her of sea creatures .. WHY? Then she moves on. And in the next few sentences, she throws in another metaphor with no relation to the previous one. And so on... Despite the lack of "flow", the characters are original and interesting.
