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Title: Too long that it really has to be.
Review: I enjoyed the story-line of this book, but I thought that Delancey and Mackenzie were almost too perfect. And what also got on my nerves was the fact that the author always used the expression :"Would that work?" It really drove me crazy! I also didn't like the fact that Wick anouced peoples deaths a little too bluntly. For example:"Paul's dead." And she also introduced Amanda to the reader without any warning. All in all I thought that the author could have said what she had to say in less pages. My friend read Pretense and it toke her like 5 days to get throught it. And she's a FAST reader! The whole time she was complaning how bad it was. The only reason she did'nt stop reading it was because she always finishes what she starts. I think Lori needs to take some lessons from Francine Rivers.
