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Title: Repeatious, sensational, no depth in characters really...
Review: I enjoyed reading most of the book...I read it in a day or two. I'm not a writer, editor, or a critic, but it seems that Alton was either writing "down" to his readers or he wrote the book in pieces and forgot that he'd already shared the same information 3 or 4 times earlier in the book. We aren't stupid! I guess it seemed that he might have been shooting for a certain number of pages and so he had to fill the pages up with repeated statistics and charaters one liners that required no thought, only fowl language. Real character development is not formed in that way. I think it was good for a first book. Better then I'd do that's for sure, but this is a world market....not to deep, but if you aren't looking for deep it's great :-)
