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Title: Definitely needs work, especially with editing
Review: Being all aroused by the previous reviews I bought this book. That was before someone finally placed a true review for this first attempt by Mar. She needs work with her story line, with the development of the characters and certainly the editing needs a lot of work. Have to give her some credit, this was a nice attempt for a first works, but it falls short for the amount of money it cost.
